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Original: The ban comes after they showed footage of  New Zealand First Member of Parliament (MP) Ron Mark repeatedly pulling his middle finger at National MP Tau Henare on August 1. Parliaments media rules state that only the Speaker or a MP that is standing and speaking can be recorded.
Revised: The ban comes after they showed footage of New Zealand First Member of Parliament (MP) Ron Mark repeatedly pulling his middle finger at National MP Tau Henare on August 1. Parliaments media rules state that only the Speaker or a MP who is standing and speaking can be recorded.
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Original:  TV3 broke this rule because Mark was sitting during his gestures.
Revised:  TV3 broke this rule as Mark was sitting during his gestures.
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Original: The Parliament's media rules state that only the Speaker or a MP who is standing and speaking can be recorded.
Revised: The Parliament's media rules state that only the Speaker or an MP who is standing and speaking can be recorded.
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Original: House Speaker Margaret Wilson told New Zealand television station , TV3, owned by Canwest , they are banned from recording New Zealand Parliament for three days.
Revised: House Speaker told New Zealand television station , TV3, owned by Canwest , they are banned from recording New Zealand Parliament for three days.
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Original: House Speaker Margaret Wilson told New Zealand television station , TV3, owned by Canwest , they are banned from recording New Zealand Parliament for three days.
Revised: House Speaker Margaret Wilson told New Zealand television station , owned by , they are banned from recording New Zealand Parliament for three days.
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Original: House Speaker Margaret Wilson told New Zealand television station , TV3, owned by Canwest , they are banned from recording New Zealand Parliament for three days.
Revised: House Speaker Margaret Wilson told New Zealand television station , TV3, owned by Canwest , they are banned from recording for three days.
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Original:  The ban comes after they showed footage of the New Zealand First Member of Parliament (MP) Ron Mark repeatedly pulling his middle finger at National MP Tau Henare on August 1.
Revised:  The ban comes after they showed footage of the Member of Parliament (MP) Ron Mark repeatedly pulling his middle finger at National MP Tau Henare on August 1.
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Original:  The ban comes after they showed footage of the New Zealand First Member of Parliament (MP) Ron Mark repeatedly pulling his middle finger at National MP Tau Henare on August 1.
Revised:  The ban comes after they showed footage of the New Zealand First Member of Parliament (MP) repeatedly pulling his middle finger at National MP Tau Henare on August 1.
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Original:  Pakistan has, in the past, blamed Indian intelligence agencies such as the Research and Analysis Wing for fuelling the unrest in Balochistan  
Revised:  Pakistan has, in the past, blamed Indian intelligence agencies such as the Research and Analysis Wing for fuelling the unrest in Balochistan . 
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Original:  The campaign group today added its voice to a growing disquiet over the worsening situation in the country that includes the International Rescue Committee and the U.S. government.
Revised:  The campaign group today added its voice to a growing disquiet over the worsening situation in the country , as expressed by the International Rescue Committee and the U.S. government.
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Original:  "Eyewitnesses in el-Fasher in North Darfur are telling us that Sudanese government military flights are flying in troops and arms on a daily basis, ” Gilmore said, urging the international community to act.
Revised:  "Eyewitnesses in el-Fasher in North Darfur are telling us that Sudanese government military flights are flying in troops and arms on a daily basis, " Gilmore said, urging the international community to act.
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Original:  “ If this offensive takes place, there will be massive, massive civilian destruction.
Revised:  " If this offensive takes place, there will be massive, massive civilian destruction.
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Original:  This will leave some 1.2 million people completely dependent on humanitarian aid, without any assistance whatsoever ” , Reeves told the Coalition for Darfur on Saturday.
Revised:  This will leave some 1.2 million people completely dependent on humanitarian aid, without any assistance whatsoever " , Reeves told the Coalition for Darfur on Saturday.
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Original:  “ This is a massive spike in figures,” said the IRC’s Kurt Tjossem, “we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur] ”
Revised:  " This is a massive spike in figures,” said the IRC’s Kurt Tjossem, “we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur] ”
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Original:  “ This is a massive spike in figures,” said the IRC’s Kurt Tjossem, “we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur] ”
Revised:  “ This is a massive spike in figures,” said the IRC’s Kurt Tjossem, “we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur] "
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Original:  The campaign group today added its voice to a growing disquiet over the worsening situation in the country, as expressed by the International Rescue Committee and the U. S. government.
Revised:  The campaign group today added its voice to a growing disquiet over the worsening situation in the country, as expressed by the International Rescue Committee .
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Original:  In a statement, the body’s Executive Deputy Secretary General Kate Gilmore, confirmed U.S. concerns that the Sudanese government are arming soldiers in preparation for conflict, despite signing a peace deal in May.
Revised:  In a statement, the body’s Executive Deputy Secretary General Kate Gilmore, confirmed concerns that the Sudanese government are arming soldiers in preparation for conflict, despite signing a peace deal in May.
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Original:  If Darfur does descend into further government sponsored conflict, the consequences would devastating for the civilian population, according to Eric Reeves of Democracy Now ! :
Revised:  If Darfur does descend into further government sponsored conflict, the consequences would devastating for the civilian population, according to Eric Reeves of Democracy Now :
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Original: A “peacekeeping gap” is likely to plunge Sudan back into major conflict in the Darfur region, according to Amnesty International.
Revised: A "peacekeeping gap" is likely to plunge Sudan back into major conflict in the Darfur region, according to Amnesty International.
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Original:  "Darfur is on the verge of a dangerous downward spiral," Frazer said, criticizing the U.N. for “foot dragging” on the issue.
Revised:  "Darfur is on the verge of a dangerous downward spiral," Frazer said, criticizing the U.N. for "foot dragging" on the issue.
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Original:  "This is a massive spike in figures, ” said the IRC ’ s Kurt Tjossem, “ we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur]"
Revised:  "This is a massive spike in figures, " said the IRC ’ s Kurt Tjossem, “ we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur]"
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Original:  "This is a massive spike in figures, ” said the IRC ’ s Kurt Tjossem, “ we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur]"
Revised:  "This is a massive spike in figures, ” said the IRC ' s Kurt Tjossem, “ we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur]"
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Original:  "This is a massive spike in figures, ” said the IRC ’ s Kurt Tjossem, “ we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur]"
Revised:  "This is a massive spike in figures, ” said the IRC ’ s Kurt Tjossem, " we are used to hearing of 2 to 4 incidents of sexual assault per month in Kalma camp [in southern Darfur]"
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Original: "If either of our countries or friends and allies were threatened at sic some number of years into the future with a weapon of mass destruction or a capability that was that lethal, I think any president, whether of Russia or the United States, would like to have available a conventional weapon that could attack that target swiftly and accurately and precisely and not feel that the only thing they had might be a nuclear weapon, which they would not want to use.", Rumsfeld said.
Revised: "If either of our countries or friends and allies were threatened at some number of years into the future with a weapon of mass destruction or a capability that was that lethal, I think any president, whether of Russia or the United States, would like to have available a conventional weapon that could attack that target swiftly and accurately and precisely and not feel that the only thing they had might be a nuclear weapon, which they would not want to use.", Rumsfeld said.
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Original: Including players and coaches, about 800 people attended the opening ceremonies, which began at 7pm at the Winchester Park baseball complex and were be led by the city's Mayor, Ann Hall.
Revised: Including players and coaches, about 800 people attended the opening ceremonies, which began at 7pm at the Winchester Park baseball complex and were led by the city's Mayor, Ann Hall.
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Original:  Overall, the tournament will feature all 17 teams competing in about 40 games.
Revised:  Overall, the tournament is to feature all 17 teams competing in about 40 games.
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Original:  Games will start at 8:30am each day, and are set to play through 11:00pm nightly.
Revised:  Games are set to start at 8:30am each day, and are set to play through 11:00pm nightly.
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Original:  Games will start at 8:30am each day, and are set to play through 11:00pm nightly.
Revised:  Games will start at 8:30am each day, and play through 11:00pm nightly.
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Original:  Some of the city's citizens have expressed excitement about and anticipation of the tournament for several weeks . 235px|Mayor Ann Hall (foreground) prepares to address attendees at opening ceremony .
Revised:  Some of the city's citizens have expressed excitement about and anticipation of the tournament for several weeks 235px|Mayor Ann Hall (foreground) prepares to address attendees at opening ceremony .
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Original:  Some of the city's citizens have expressed excitement about and anticipation of the tournament for several weeks . 235px|Mayor Ann Hall (foreground) prepares to address attendees at opening ceremony .
Revised:  Some of the city's citizens have expressed excitement about and anticipation of the tournament for several weeks . .
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Original:  199px|Members of the Brownwood Blue Jays prepare to accept souvenir bags from the city's Mayor.
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Original:  335px | center| Kids Zone area at the tournament .335px |Players and coaches gather at the closing of the opening ceremony
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Original:  335px | center| Kids Zone area at the tournament .335px |Players and coaches gather at the closing of the opening ceremony
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Original:  Including players and coaches, about 800 people attended the opening ceremonies, which began at 7pm at the Winchester Park baseball complex and were led by the city's Mayor, Ann Hall.
Revised:  Including players and coaches, about 800 people attended the opening ceremonies, which began at 7:00 pm at the Winchester Park baseball complex and were led by the city's Mayor, Ann Hall.
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Original:  The event's opening ceremony was held on Sunday July 22, 2012.
Revised:  The event's opening ceremony was held on Sunday July 22nd.
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Original:   Including players and coaches, about 800 people attended the opening ceremonies, which began at 7:00 pm at the Winchester Park baseball complex and were led by the city's Mayor, Ann Hall.
Revised:  Including players and coaches, about 800 people attended the opening ceremonies, which began at 7pm at the Winchester Park baseball complex and were led by the city's Mayor, Ann Hall.
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Original:  200px |  Kids Zone area at the tournament . 200px |Players and coaches gather at the closing of the opening ceremony
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Original:  200px |  Kids Zone area at the tournament . 200px |Players and coaches gather at the closing of the opening ceremony
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Original: The  city of , with a modest population of just over 2,700, is hosting the Texas Teenage Baseball-Softball Association's 8U [age 8 and under] Boys State Tournament.
Revised: The Texas city of , with a modest population of just over 2,700, is hosting the Texas Teenage Baseball-Softball Association's 8U [age 8 and under] Boys State Tournament.
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Original:  He started playing basketball after a guy on the street suggested he take up the sport , having never seriously considered any other sport.
Revised:  He started playing basketball after a random person suggested he take up the sport , having never seriously considered any other sport.
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Original:  He started playing basketball after a guy on the street suggested he take up the sport , having never seriously considered any other sport.
Revised:  He started playing basketball after a guy on the street suggested he take up the sport . Oregembe stated he'd never previously seriously considered any other sport.
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Original:  His wheelchair basketball journey has taken him to Spain  to play in their local league  and around the world with the Great Britain national team.
Revised:  His wheelchair basketball journey has taken him to Spain ( to play in their local league and around the world with the Great Britain national team.
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Original:  His wheelchair basketball journey has taken him to Spain  to play in their local league  and around the world with the Great Britain national team.
Revised:  His wheelchair basketball journey has taken him to Spain to play in their local league ) and around the world with the Great Britain national team.
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Original:  Playing club wheelchair basketball on the continent was a different issues where he had it both to his face and behind his back, noting it was a particular problem in Spain.
Revised:  Playing club wheelchair basketball on the continent was a different issue where he had it both to his face and behind his back, noting it was a particular problem in Spain.
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Original: When asked if he had faced racism while playing, he said that in the United Kingdom  he had not , despite the reputation the country holds in this area.
Revised: While the United Kingdom he had not , despite the reputation the country holds in this area.
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Original:  Playing club wheelchair basketball on the continent was a different issue where he had it both to his face and behind his back, noting it was a particular problem in Spain.
Revised:  Playing club wheelchair basketball on the continent was a different issue as he had experienced racism both to his face and behind his back, noting it was a particular problem in Spain.
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Original: Wikinews sat down with Great Britain men's national wheelchair basketball player Ade Oregembe before a practice session at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in Sydney . Nigerian-born Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted polio when he an infant.
Revised: Wikinews sat down with player Ade Oregembe before a practice session at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in Sydney . Nigerian-born Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted polio when he an infant.
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Original: Wikinews sat down with Great Britain men's national wheelchair basketball player Ade Oregembe before a practice session at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in Sydney . Nigerian-born Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted polio when he an infant.
Revised: Wikinews sat down with Great Britain men's national wheelchair basketball player Ade Oregembe before a practice session at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in . Nigerian-born Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted polio when he an infant.
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Original: Wikinews sat down with Great Britain men's national wheelchair basketball player Ade Oregembe before a practice session at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in Sydney . Nigerian-born Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted polio when he an infant.
Revised: Wikinews sat down with Great Britain men's national wheelchair basketball player Ade Oregembe before a practice session at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in Sydney . Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted polio when he an infant.
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Original: Wikinews sat down with Great Britain men's national wheelchair basketball player Ade Oregembe before a practice session at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in Sydney . Nigerian-born Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted polio when he an infant.
Revised: Wikinews sat down with Great Britain men's national wheelchair basketball player Ade Oregembe before a practice session at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in Sydney . Nigerian-born Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted when he an infant.
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Original:  His wheelchair basketball journey has taken him to Spain (to play in their local league) and around the world with the Great Britain national team.
Revised:  His journey has taken him to Spain (to play in their local league) and around the world with the Great Britain national team.
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Original:  His wheelchair basketball journey has taken him to Spain (to play in their local league) and around the world with the Great Britain national team.
Revised:  His wheelchair basketball journey has taken him to (to play in their local league) and around the world with the Great Britain national team.
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Original:  Oregembe was asked about two of the big Paralympic stories, and , able-bodied competitors, competing in their sport at the Paralympics.
Revised:  Oregembe was asked about two of the big stories, and , able-bodied competitors, competing in their sport at the Paralympics.
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Original:  He did support Pistorius's inclusion in the Olympics , nor the inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheel chair basketball at the Paralympics.
Revised:  He did support Pistorius's inclusion in the , nor the inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheel chair basketball at the Paralympics.
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Original:  Oregembe's Great Britain side kicks off their London campaign on August 30 against Germany men's national wheelchair basketball team.
Revised:  Oregembe's Great Britain side kicks off their on August 30 against Germany men's national wheelchair basketball team.
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Original:  Oregembe's Great Britain side kicks off their London campaign on August 30 against Germany men's national wheelchair basketball team.
Revised:  Oregembe's Great Britain side kicks off their London campaign on August 30 against men's national wheelchair basketball team.
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Original: Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted when he an infant.
Revised: Oregembe, one of twenty-four children, contracted when an infant.
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Original:  Oregembe was asked about two of the big stories , and , able-bodied competitors , competing in their sport at the Paralympics.
Revised:  Oregembe was asked about two of the big stories : , and — able-bodied competitors , competing in their sport at the Paralympics.
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Original:  Oregembe was asked about two of the big stories , and , able-bodied competitors , competing in their sport at the Paralympics.
Revised:  Oregembe was asked about two of the big stories , and , able-bodied competitors — competing in their sport at the Paralympics.
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Original:  He did support Pistorius's inclusion in the , nor the inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheel chair basketball at the Paralympics.
Revised:  He did support Pistorius's inclusion in the , but not the inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheel chair basketball at the Paralympics.
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Original:  He did support Pistorius's inclusion in the , nor the inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheel chair basketball at the Paralympics.
Revised:  He did support Pistorius's inclusion in the , nor the inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheelchair basketball at the Paralympics.
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Original:  While the United Kingdom has a reputation for sport related racism, Oregembe said he had not experienced much of it on the courts.
Revised:  While the United Kingdom has a reputation for sport-related racism, Oregembe said he had not experienced much of it on the courts.
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Original:  Oregembe's Great Britain side kicks off their on August 30 against  men's national wheelchair basketball team.
Revised:  Oregembe's Great Britain side kicks off their on August 30 against the men's national wheelchair basketball team.
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Original:  He did  support Pistorius's inclusion in the , but not the inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheelchair basketball at the Paralympics.
Revised:  He did not support Pistorius's inclusion in the , but not the inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheelchair basketball at the Paralympics.
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Original:  He did  support Pistorius's inclusion in the , but not the inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheelchair basketball at the Paralympics.
Revised:  He did support Pistorius's inclusion in the , nor inclusion of able-bodied athletes in wheelchair basketball at the Paralympics.
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Original:  Oregembe was asked about two of the big  stories: , and —able-bodied competitors— competing in their sport at the Paralympics.
Revised:  Oregembe was asked about two of the big Paralympic stories: , and —able-bodied competitors— competing in their sport at the Paralympics.
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Original: The BBC is reporting that a coach crash in Germany has killed 1 and injured 5.
Revised: A has coach crash in Germany has killed 1 and injured 5.
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Original:  The one death is a British citizen, and has be confirmed by the foreign office in London.
Revised:  The one death is a British citizen, has be confirmed by the foreign office in London.
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Original:  Developing . B
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Original:   Developing
Revised:  Apparently, the coach did not have winter tyres. Developing
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Original: A coach has crashed in Germany, between Ludwighausen and Kaiserslautern, killing 1 and injuring 7.
Revised: A bus has crashed in Germany, between Ludwighausen and Kaiserslautern, killing 1 and injuring 7.
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Original:  The coach was carrying 34 people on a skiing trip, the circumstances of the accident are not yet known.
Revised:  The bus was carrying 34 people on a skiing trip, the circumstances of the accident are not yet known.
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