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Original:  The European diseases spread from the carriers to the indigenous populations, who had no immunity, leading to more serious cases and higher mortality.
Revised:  The European diseases spread from the carriers to the Indigenous populations, who had no immunity, leading to more serious cases and higher mortality.
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Original:  Facts On File, New York, NY, USA, 2016, URL Smallpox is among the most notable of diseases in the Columbian exchange due to the high number of deaths and impact on life for indigenous societies.
Revised:  Facts On File, New York, NY, USA, 2016, URL Smallpox is among the most notable of diseases in the Columbian Exchange due to the high number of deaths and impact on life for indigenous societies.
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Original:  Facts On File, New York, NY, USA, 2016, URL Smallpox is among the most notable of diseases in the Columbian exchange due to the high number of deaths and impact on life for indigenous societies.
Revised:  Facts On File, New York, NY, USA, 2016, URL Smallpox is among the most notable of diseases in the Columbian exchange due to the high number of deaths and impact on life for Indigenous societies.
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Original:  The disease was carried by Christopher Columbus and his crew from Europe, where it had been endemic for over seven hundred years.
Revised:  The disease was carried by Columbus and his crew from Europe, where it had been endemic for over seven hundred years.
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Original:  The Taino population before European contact is estimated to have been between 60,000 to 8 million people, and the entire nation was virtually extinct 50 years after contact, which has primarily been attributed to the  diseases.
Revised:  The Taíno population before European contact is estimated to have been between 60,000 to 8 million people, and the entire nation was virtually extinct 50 years after contact, which has primarily been attributed to the diseases.
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Original: Engerman, p. 486 Because the indigenous societies, including the Tainos , were unfamiliar with the diseases, they were not prepared to deal with the social consequences.
Revised: Engerman, p. 486 Because the Indigenous societies, including the Tainos , were unfamiliar with the diseases, they were not prepared to deal with the social consequences.
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Original: Engerman, p. 486 Because the indigenous societies, including the Tainos , were unfamiliar with the diseases, they were not prepared to deal with the social consequences.
Revised: Engerman, p. 486 Because the indigenous societies, including the Taínos , were unfamiliar with the diseases, they were not prepared to deal with the social consequences.
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Original:  The high number of people incapacitated by the disease disrupted the normal cycles of agriculture and hunting that sustained the native populations.
Revised:  The high number of people incapacitated by the disease disrupted the normal cycles of agriculture and hunting that sustained the Native American populations.
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Original:  The eventual enslavement of the Taino people by the Europeans compounded the effects of the epidemics in the downfall of indigenous societies.
Revised:  The eventual enslavement of the Taíno people by the Europeans compounded the effects of the epidemics in the downfall of indigenous societies.
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Original:  The eventual enslavement of the Taino people by the Europeans compounded the effects of the epidemics in the downfall of indigenous societies.
Revised:  The eventual enslavement of the Taino people by the Europeans compounded the effects of the epidemics in the downfall of the Indigenous societies.
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Original: Impact of the transatlantic slave trade As the population of enslaved indigenous peoples fell due to disease and abuse, the Spanish  began to import enslaved workers from Africa in 1505.
Revised: Impact of the transatlantic slave trade As the population of enslaved Indigenous peoples fell due to disease and abuse, the Spanish began to import enslaved workers from Africa in 1505.
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Original: The Sugar Revolutions and Slavery, U.S. Library of Congress Because there was already an established European colonial presence in Africa at the time, the enslaved people were less vulnerable to disease than the Taino people on Hispanola.
Revised: The Sugar Revolutions and Slavery, U.S. Library of Congress Because there was already an established European colonial presence in Africa at the time, the enslaved Africans were less vulnerable to disease than the Taino people on Hispanola.
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Original: The Sugar Revolutions and Slavery, U.S. Library of Congress Because there was already an established European colonial presence in Africa at the time, the enslaved people were less vulnerable to disease than the Taino people on Hispanola.
Revised: The Sugar Revolutions and Slavery, U.S. Library of Congress Because there was already an established European colonial presence in Africa at the time, the enslaved people were less vulnerable to disease than the Taíno people on Hispanola.
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Original:  At the time, malaria was endemic in both Europe and Africa, though more prevalent in Africa .
Revised:  At the time, malaria was endemic both in Europe and Africa, though more prevalent in Africa .
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Original:  At the time, malaria was endemic in both Europe and Africa, though more prevalent in Africa .
Revised:  At the time, malaria was endemic in both Europe and Africa, though more prevalent in the latter continent .
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Original:  Many of the African-born enslaved people had genetic protections against malaria that indigenous enslaved people did not.
Revised:  Many of the African-born enslaved people had genetic protections against malaria that Indigenous enslaved people did not.
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Original:  As malaria, smallpox  and other diseases spread the indigenous population continued to fall, which increased the motivation for the Spanish  to continue to import more enslaved workers from Africa.
Revised:  As malaria, smallpox , and other diseases spread the indigenous population continued to fall, which increased the motivation for the Spanish to continue to import more enslaved workers from Africa.
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Original:  As malaria, smallpox  and other diseases spread the indigenous population continued to fall, which increased the motivation for the Spanish  to continue to import more enslaved workers from Africa.
Revised:  As malaria, smallpox and other diseases spread the Indigenous populations continued to fall, which increased the motivation for the Spanish to continue to import more enslaved workers from Africa.
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Original: Before the first wave of European colonization, the Indigenous peoples of the  Caribbean are thought to have lived with infrequent epidemic diseases, brought about by limited contact between tribes.
Revised: Before the first wave of European colonization, the Indigenous peoples of the Americas and the Caribbean are thought to have lived with infrequent epidemic diseases, brought about by limited contact between tribes.
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Original:  This left them socially and biologically unprepared when the Italian explorer Christopher Columbus and his crew introduced several infectious diseases, including smallpox, whooping cough, and measles following his 1492 voyage  .
Revised:  This left them socially and biologically unprepared when the Italian explorer Christopher Columbus and his crew introduced several infectious diseases, including smallpox, whooping cough, and measles following his 1492 voyage to the Americas .
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Original:  Smallpox first broke out in the Americas on the island of Hispaniola shortly after Columbus' s first voyage.
Revised:  Smallpox first broke out in the Americas on the island of Hispaniola shortly after Columbus' first voyage.
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Original: Common nuisance species Common wildlife pests include armadillos, skunks, boars, foxes, squirrels, snakes, rats, groundhogs, beavers, opossums, raccoons, bats, moles, deer, mice, coyotes, bears, ravens, seagulls, woodpeckers and pigeons.
Revised: Common nuisance species Wild animals that can cause problems in your home, garden or yard include armadillos, skunks, boars, foxes, squirrels, snakes, rats, groundhogs, beavers, opossums, raccoons, bats, moles, deer, mice, coyotes, bears, ravens, seagulls, woodpeckers and pigeons.
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Original:  Wildlife are usually only pests  in certain situations, such as when their numbers become "excessive" in a particular area  .
Revised:  Wildlife are usually only pests in certain situations, such as when an animal's population becomes too large for a particular area .
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Original:  Adapted from the book Wild Neighbors: The Humane Approach to Living with Wildlife, these strategies include preventing problems with wildlife species such as bats, bears, chipmunks, coyotes, deer, mice, racoons and snakes.
Revised:  Adapted from their book Wild Neighbors: The Humane Approach to Living with Wildlife, these strategies include preventing problems with wildlife species such as bats, bears, chipmunks, coyotes, deer, mice, racoons and snakes.
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Original:  Adapted from the book Wild Neighbors: The Humane Approach to Living with Wildlife, these strategies include preventing problems with wildlife species such as bats, bears, chipmunks, coyotes, deer, mice, racoons and snakes.
Revised:  Adapted from the book Wild Neighbors: The Humane Approach to Living with Wildlife, these strategies help preven problems with wildlife species such as bats, bears, chipmunks, coyotes, deer, mice, racoons and snakes.
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Original:   National Wildlife Control Operators Association. www.nwcoa.org. is an experimental website of the National Wildlife Control Operators Association based on the wordpress platform and may or may not contain correct information regarding the association.
Revised:  Further Reading National Wildlife Control Operators Association. www.nwcoa.org. is an experimental website of the National Wildlife Control Operators Association based on the wordpress platform and may or may not contain correct information regarding the association.
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Original:  Adapted from their book Wild Neighbors: The Humane Approach to Living with Wildlife, these strategies help prevent problems with wildlife species such as bats, bears, chipmunks, coyotes, deer, mice, racoons and snakes.
Revised:  Adapted from their book Wild Neighbors: The Humane Approach to Living with Wildlife, these strategies help preven problems with wildlife species such as bats, bears, chipmunks, coyotes, deer, mice, racoons and snakes.
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Original:  The techniques include sealing a house's construction (builders) gap, soffit returns, gable vents, pipe chases, utility chases, vents, siding trim gap, etc .
Revised:  The techniques include sealing a house's construction (builders) gap, soffit returns, gable vents, pipe chases, utility chases, vents, siding trim gap, with rustproof material that animals can't easily gnaw through, usually steel wool .
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Original:  Greece Rome, 50(1), 77–84. . p. 81 The most apparent distinctions between Greek and Etruscan drinking parties appear in Etruscan art.
Revised:  Greece The most apparent distinctions between Greek and Etruscan drinking parties appear in Etruscan art.
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Original:  Greece Rome, 50(1), 77–84. . p. 82 The Sarcophagus of the Married URL found in the Etruscan region dating to 520–530 BC, depicts a man and women lounging together in the context of a banquet, Salazar, S. H. (2006).
Revised:  Greece The Sarcophagus of the Married URL found in the Etruscan region dating to 520–530 BC, depicts a man and women lounging together in the context of a banquet, Salazar, S. H. (2006).
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Original:  Greece Rome, 50(1), 77–84. . p. 79 Men were expected to control their own wine consumption, but women were not given this authority.
Revised:  Greece Men were expected to control their own wine consumption, but women were not given this authority.
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Original:  Companion to Women in the Ancient World, Chapter 5 URL Additionally, Etruscan women were often buried with drinking and feasting paraphernalia, suggesting that they partook in these activities.
Revised:  Additionally, Etruscan women were often buried with drinking and feasting paraphernalia, suggesting that they partook in these activities.
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Original: ]] File:Paris - Louvre - Sarcophage.jpg|Paris – Louvre – Sarcophagus of the Married Couple Etruscan art shows scenes of banqueting that recall aspects of the Greek symposia;
Revised: ]] Etruscan art shows scenes of banqueting that recall aspects of the Greek symposia;
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Original:  The Sarcophagus of the Married Couple , found in the Etruscan region dating to 520–530 BC, depicts a man and women lounging together in the context of a banquet, which is a stark contrast with gendered Greek drinking parties.
Revised:  The Sarcophagus of the Spouses , found in the Etruscan region dating to 520–530 BC, depicts a man and women lounging together in the context of a banquet, which is a stark contrast with gendered Greek drinking parties.
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Original:  The American Colonization Society was established in 1817 by a variety of national leaders, both from the North and South, to relocated free blacks from the United States to other countries, preferably  Africa.
Revised:  The American Colonization Society was established in 1817 by a variety of national leaders, both from the North and South, to relocate free blacks from the United States to other countries, preferably Africa.
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Original:  The American Colonization Society was established in 1817 by a variety of national leaders, both from the North and South, to relocated free blacks from the United States to other countries, preferably  Africa.
Revised:  The American Colonization Society was established in 1817 by a variety of national leaders, both from the North and South, to relocated free blacks from the United States to other countries, preferably in Africa.
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Original:   After Granville arrived in Philadelphia in May 1824, he was welcome by Bishop Richard Allen and an entire cadre of abolitionists who helped organize the movement, which resulted in more than 6,000 free-Blacks emigrating to Haiti in a period of two years.
Revised:  Success After Granville arrived in Philadelphia in May 1824, he was welcome by Bishop Richard Allen and an entire cadre of abolitionists who helped organize the movement, which resulted in more than 6,000 free-Blacks emigrating to Haiti in a period of two years.
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Original: Advocacy of emmigration to Africa The American Colonization Society was established in 1817 by a variety of national leaders, both from the North and South, to relocate free blacks from the United States to other countries, preferably in Africa.
Revised: Advocacy of emigration to Africa The American Colonization Society was established in 1817 by a variety of national leaders, both from the North and South, to relocate free blacks from the United States to other countries, preferably in Africa.
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Original: Advocacy of emmigration to Haiti Initial approaches Some time in the early months of 1824, after failing to recruit enough potential emigrants for the west coast of Africa and lagging behind raising funds, Dewey dared to come up with another relocation plan.
Revised: Advocacy of emigration to Haiti Initial approaches Some time in the early months of 1824, after failing to recruit enough potential emigrants for the west coast of Africa and lagging behind raising funds, Dewey dared to come up with another relocation plan.
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Original: Not only does it read like a paraphrase, with no additional imformation added, but the bibliography to Female Warriors makes specific mention of Hale’s work: see vol. 1, p. xv. She also appears in Jessica Amanda Salmonson’s The Encyclopedia of Amazons (1991).
Revised: Not only does it read like a paraphrase, with no additional information added, but the bibliography to Female Warriors makes specific mention of Hale’s work: see vol. 1, p. xv. She also appears in Jessica Amanda Salmonson’s The Encyclopedia of Amazons (1991).
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Original: Louisa Battistati is recorded in Sarah Josepha Hale’s Sketches of all distinguished women (1853) as a heroine of the insurrection against Austrian rule that had taken place in Lombardy five years previously, and which is known as the Five Days of Milan.
Revised: Louisa Battistati is recorded in Sarah Josepha Hale’s Sketches of all distinguished women (1853) as a heroine of the insurrection against Austrian rule that had taken place in Lombardy known as the Five Days of Milan.
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Original:   A native of Stradella, Sardinia, and a mantua-maker at Milan, [ Louisa Battistati] displayed remarkable courage during the five days of the Revolution at Milan, in 1848.
Revised:  Hale wrote: A native of Stradella, Sardinia, and a mantua-maker at Milan, [ Louisa Battistati] displayed remarkable courage during the five days of the Revolution at Milan, in 1848.
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Original:   A native of Stradella, Sardinia, and a mantua-maker at Milan, [ Louisa Battistati] displayed remarkable courage during the five days of the Revolution at Milan, in 1848.
Revised:  A native of Stradella, Sardinia, and a mantua-maker at Milan, [ Luisa Battistati] displayed remarkable courage during the five days of the Revolution at Milan, in 1848.
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Original:  Category:Year of birth missing Category:Year of death missing Category:  History of Milan Category:People of the Revolutions of 1848 Category:Women in 19th-century warfare Category:Women in European warfare Category:People from the Province of As
Revised:  Category:Year of birth missing Category:Year of death missing Category: History of Milan Category:People of the Revolutions of 1848 Category:Women in 19th-century warfare Category:Women in European warfa
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Original:  however, he reversed his decision to tackle the Coronavirus URL Guterres started a coronavirus vaccination campaign in the summer of 2021, addressing the importance of the URL Within the year preceding the campaign, multiple mask mandates were URL He has received generally received praise for his handling of the pandemic, with the number of covid cases in the country significantly dropping after the campaign was URL
Revised:  however, he reversed his decision to tackle the Coronavirus URL Guterres started a coronavirus vaccination campaign in the summer of 2021, addressing the importance of the URL Within the year preceding the campaign, multiple mask mandates were URL He has received generally received praise for his handling of the pandemic, with the number of COVID cases in the country significantly dropping after the campaign was URL
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Original: Kickboxing record 52 Wins (22 (T)KO's, 30 decisions), 12 Losses DateResultOpponentEventMethodRoundTime 11/02/2007 Loss Gokhan Saki K-1 Fighting Network Turkey 2007  Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:
Revised: Kickboxing record 52 Wins (22 KOs), 12 Losses DateResultOpponentEventMethodRoundTime 11/02/2007 Loss Gokhan Saki K-1 Fighting Network Turkey 2007 Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:
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Original: 00 10/06/2007 Loss Alban Galonnier TK2 World MAX 2007 , Aix en Provence, France Decision 5 2:
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Original: 00 10/06/2007 Loss Alban Galonnier TK2 World MAX 2007 , Aix en Provence, France Decision 5 2:
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Original: 00 09/07/2007 Win Petar Majstorovic Night of Fighters 4 , Bratislava, Slovakia Decision 3 3:00 06/23/2007 Loss Bjorn Bregy K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam  KO (Punches) 2 2:12 06/23/2007 Win Maxim Neledva K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam  Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:00 05/25/2007 Win Ricardo van den Bos K-1 Ringmasters Fight Night , Istanbul, Turkey TKO (Corner stoppage) 3 03/10/2007 Win Stefan Leko K-1 Fighting Network Croatia 2007 , Split Etx.
Revised: 00 09.07.2007 Win Petar Majstorovic Night of Fighters 4 , Bratislava, Slovakia Decision 3 3:00 06/23/2007 Loss Bjorn Bregy K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam KO (Punches) 2 2:12 06/23/2007 Win Maxim Neledva K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:00 05/25/2007 Win Ricardo van den Bos K-1 Ringmasters Fight Night , Istanbul, Turkey TKO (Corner stoppage) 3 03/10/2007 Win Stefan Leko K-1 Fighting Network Croatia 2007 , Split Etx.
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Original: 00 09/07/2007 Win Petar Majstorovic Night of Fighters 4 , Bratislava, Slovakia Decision 3 3:00 06/23/2007 Loss Bjorn Bregy K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam  KO (Punches) 2 2:12 06/23/2007 Win Maxim Neledva K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam  Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:00 05/25/2007 Win Ricardo van den Bos K-1 Ringmasters Fight Night , Istanbul, Turkey TKO (Corner stoppage) 3 03/10/2007 Win Stefan Leko K-1 Fighting Network Croatia 2007 , Split Etx.
Revised: 00 09/07/2007 Win Petar Majstorovic Night of Fighters 4 Bratislava, Slovakia Decision 3 3:00 06/23/2007 Loss Bjorn Bregy K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam KO (Punches) 2 2:12 06/23/2007 Win Maxim Neledva K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:00 05/25/2007 Win Ricardo van den Bos K-1 Ringmasters Fight Night , Istanbul, Turkey TKO (Corner stoppage) 3 03/10/2007 Win Stefan Leko K-1 Fighting Network Croatia 2007 , Split Etx.
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Original: 00 09/07/2007 Win Petar Majstorovic Night of Fighters 4 , Bratislava, Slovakia Decision 3 3:00 06/23/2007 Loss Bjorn Bregy K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam  KO (Punches) 2 2:12 06/23/2007 Win Maxim Neledva K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam  Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:00 05/25/2007 Win Ricardo van den Bos K-1 Ringmasters Fight Night , Istanbul, Turkey TKO (Corner stoppage) 3 03/10/2007 Win Stefan Leko K-1 Fighting Network Croatia 2007 , Split Etx.
Revised: 00 09/07/2007 Win Petar Majstorovic Night of Fighters 4 , Bratislava, Slovakia Decision 3 3:00 06.23.2007 Loss Bjorn Bregy K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam KO (Punches) 2 2:12 06/23/2007 Win Maxim Neledva K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:00 05/25/2007 Win Ricardo van den Bos K-1 Ringmasters Fight Night , Istanbul, Turkey TKO (Corner stoppage) 3 03/10/2007 Win Stefan Leko K-1 Fighting Network Croatia 2007 , Split Etx.
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Original: 00 09/07/2007 Win Petar Majstorovic Night of Fighters 4 , Bratislava, Slovakia Decision 3 3:00 06/23/2007 Loss Bjorn Bregy K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam  KO (Punches) 2 2:12 06/23/2007 Win Maxim Neledva K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam  Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:00 05/25/2007 Win Ricardo van den Bos K-1 Ringmasters Fight Night , Istanbul, Turkey TKO (Corner stoppage) 3 03/10/2007 Win Stefan Leko K-1 Fighting Network Croatia 2007 , Split Etx.
Revised: 00 09/07/2007 Win Petar Majstorovic Night of Fighters 4 , Bratislava, Slovakia Decision 3 3:00 06/23/2007 Loss Bjorn Bregy K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam KO (Punches) 2 2:12 06.23.2007 Win Maxim Neledva K-1 World GP 2007 in Amsterdam Decision (Unanimous) 3 3:00 05/25/2007 Win Ricardo van den Bos K-1 Ringmasters Fight Night , Istanbul, Turkey TKO (Corner stoppage) 3 03/10/2007 Win Stefan Leko K-1 Fighting Network Croatia 2007 , Split Etx.
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