wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The Superdome had been opened as a refuge of last resort for people who could not take part in the planned evacuation of the city before the storm.
Revised:  The Superdome had been opened as a refuge of last resort for people who did not participate in the voluntary evacuation of the city before the storm.
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Original: In a close vote that gained bipartisan support from the major parties, the New South Wales (NSW) House of Representatives has supported a bill that would allow same-sex couples to adopt.
Revised: In a close vote the New South Wales (NSW) House of Representatives has supported a bill that would allow same-sex couples to adopt.
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Original:  Having been rejected previously for ammendments that would allow church-based adoption agencies to refuse applications from same-sex couples, the  bill finally gained approval from the Premier of NSW, Kristina Keneally of the Australian Labor Party and the Opposition Leader of NSW, Barry O'Farrell of the Liberal Party of Australia.
Revised:  Having been rejected previously for ammendments that would allow church-based adoption agencies to refuse applications from same-sex couples, the introduction of the bill finally gained approval from the Premier of NSW, Kristina Keneally of the Australian Labor Party and the Opposition Leader of NSW, Barry O'Farrell of the Liberal Party of Australia.
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Original:  While O' farrell claimed that he supported "this measure today [...] for the sake of children but also because I don't believe our society should exclude because of gender, sexuality, faith, background or some other factor, people who have a contribution they can make."
Revised:  While O' Farrell claimed that he supported "this measure today [...] for the sake of children but also because I don't believe our society should exclude because of gender, sexuality, faith, background or some other factor, people who have a contribution they can make."
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Original:  In a close vote the New South Wales (NSW) Legislative Assembly has supported a bill that would allow same-sex couples to adopt  .
Revised:  In a close vote the New South Wales (NSW) Legislative Assembly has supported a bill that would allow same-sex couples to adopt children .
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Original:  Having been rejected previously for ammendments that would allow church-based adoption agencies to refuse applications from same-sex couples, the introduction of the bill finally gained approval from the Premier of NSW, Kristina Keneally of the Australian Labor Party and the Opposition Leader of NSW, Barry O'Farrell of the Liberal Party of Australia.
Revised:  Having been rejected previously for ammendments that would allow church-based adoption agencies to refuse applications from same-sex couples, the introduction of the bill finally gained approval from the Premier Kristina Keneally of the Australian Labor Party and the Opposition Leader of NSW, Barry O'Farrell of the Liberal Party of Australia.
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Original:  Having been rejected previously for ammendments that would allow church-based adoption agencies to refuse applications from same-sex couples, the introduction of the bill finally gained approval from the Premier of NSW, Kristina Keneally of the Australian Labor Party and the Opposition Leader of NSW, Barry O'Farrell of the Liberal Party of Australia.
Revised:  Having been rejected previously for ammendments that would allow church-based adoption agencies to refuse applications from same-sex couples, the introduction of the bill finally gained approval from the Premier of NSW, Kristina Keneally of the Australian Labor Party and the Opposition Leader Barry O'Farrell of the Liberal Party of Australia.
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Original:  The bill was introduced by Independent MP and Lord Mayor of Sydney, Clover Moore, who has been an avid supporter of LBGT rights and reportedly smiled and clapped after the bill was pass in the lower house.
Revised:  The bill was introduced by Independent MP and Lord Mayor of Sydney, Clover Moore, who has been an avid supporter of LBGT rights and reportedly smiled and clapped after the bill was passed in the lower house.
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Original: Having been rejected previously for ammendments that would allow church-based adoption agencies to refuse applications from same-sex couples, the introduction of the bill finally gained approval from the Premier Kristina Keneally of the Australian Labor Party and the Opposition Leader Barry O'Farrell of the Liberal Party of Australia.
Revised: Having been rejected previously for amendments that would allow church-based adoption agencies to refuse applications from same-sex couples, the introduction of the bill finally gained approval from the Premier Kristina Keneally of the Australian Labor Party and the Opposition Leader Barry O'Farrell of the Liberal Party of Australia.
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Original:  The bill was introduced by Independent MP and Lord Mayor of Sydney, Clover Moore, who has been an avid supporter of LBGT rights and reportedly smiled and clapped after the bill was passed in the lower house.
Revised:  The bill was introduced by Independent MP and Lord Mayor of Sydney, Clover Moore, who has been an avid supporter of LGBT rights and reportedly smiled and clapped after the bill was passed in the lower house.
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Original: A school in Melbourne, Australia has experienced a backlash from the public for changing the lyrics of the iconic Australian folk song , Kookaburra Sits in the Old Gum Tree by Marion Sinclair, from "Laugh, kookaburra, laugh, kookaburra, gay your life must be" to "fun your life must be".
Revised: A school in Melbourne, Australia has experienced a backlash from the public for changing the last line of Marion Sinclair's iconic Australian folk song , Kookaburra Sits in the Old Gum Tree by Marion Sinclair, from "Laugh, kookaburra, laugh, kookaburra, gay your life must be" to "fun your life must be".
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Original: A school in Melbourne, Australia has experienced a backlash from the public for changing the lyrics of the iconic Australian folk song , Kookaburra Sits in the Old Gum Tree by Marion Sinclair, from "Laugh, kookaburra, laugh, kookaburra, gay your life must be" to "fun your life must be".
Revised: A school in Melbourne, Australia has experienced a backlash from the public for changing the lyrics of the iconic Australian folk song Kookaburra Sits in the Old Gum Tree by Marion Sinclair, from "Laugh, kookaburra, laugh, kookaburra, gay your life must be" to "fun your life must be".
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Original: A school in Melbourne, Australia has experienced a backlash from the public for changing the lyrics of the iconic Australian folk song , Kookaburra Sits in the Old Gum Tree by Marion Sinclair, from "Laugh, kookaburra, laugh, kookaburra, gay your life must be" to "fun your life must be".
Revised: A school in Melbourne, Australia has experienced a backlash from the public for changing the lyrics of the iconic Australian folk song , Kookaburra Sits in the Old Gum Tree from "Laugh, kookaburra, laugh, kookaburra, gay your life must be" to "fun your life must be".
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Original:  Gary Martin, principal of Le Page Primary School in Melbourne  claims that he changed the lyrics as he thought that "the kids will roll around the floor in fits of laughter" upon hearing the original lyrics.
Revised:  Gary Martin, principal of Le Page Primary School in Melbourne , claims that he changed the lyrics as he thought that "the kids will roll around the floor in fits of laughter" upon hearing the original lyrics.
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Original:  Martin wanted to reduce classroom disruption by not using the word 'gay' which hear means 'happy' , as it appears on the playground as an insult.
Revised:  Martin wanted to reduce classroom disruption by omitting the word 'gay' which hear means 'happy' , as it appears on the playground as an insult.
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Original:  Martin wanted to reduce classroom disruption by not using the word 'gay' which hear means 'happy' , as it appears on the playground as an insult.
Revised:  Martin wanted to reduce classroom disruption by not using the word 'gay' which hear means 'happy' , as it was also commonly used as a playground insult.
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Original:  Martin concluded in an interview conducted by the Nine Network by saying "I wasn't trying to incite or insult gay people, [..] it was just a decision at the time that I thought would minimise a disruptive atmosphere with grades one and two".
Revised:  Martin concluded an interview conducted by the Nine Network by saying "I wasn't trying to incite or insult gay people, [..] it was just a decision at the time that I thought would minimise a disruptive atmosphere with grades one and two".
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Original:  Earlier this year, musical group Men At Work were made to pay-out millions in royalities for using a scale of the iconic song without permission in there hit song Down Under
Revised:  Earlier this year, musical group Men At Work were made to pay millions of dollars in royalties for using a scale of the iconic song without permission in there hit song Down Under
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Original:  Earlier this year, musical group Men At Work were made to pay-out millions in royalities for using a scale of the iconic song without permission in there hit song Down Under
Revised:  Earlier this year, musical group Men At Work were made to pay-out millions in royalities for using a scale of the iconic song without permission in their hit song Down Under
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Original:  Martin wanted to reduce classroom disruption by omitting the word 'gay' , here used to mean "happy", as it was also commonly used as a playground insult.
Revised:  Martin wanted to reduce classroom disruption by omitting the word "gay" , here used to mean "happy", as it was also commonly used as a playground insult.
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Original:  The United States House of Representatives is expected to pass a similar bil   
Revised:  The United States House of Representatives is expected to pass a similar bill later today. 
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Original:  Bush has  asked his father, former President George H.W. Bush and former President Bill Clinton to help raise private funds for relief like they did for the December 2004 tsunami in Asia  
Revised:  Bush has also asked his father, former President George H.W. Bush and former President Bill Clinton to help raise private funds for relief like they did for the December 2004 tsunami in Asia 
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Original:  Bush has  asked his father, former President George H.W. Bush and former President Bill Clinton to help raise private funds for relief like they did for the December 2004 tsunami in Asia  
Revised:  Bush has asked his father, former President George H.W. Bush and former President Bill Clinton to help raise private funds for relief like they did for the December 2004 tsunami in Asia . 
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Original: Bush has stated that the U.S. will not accept aid from foreign nations: I'm not expecting much from foreign nations because we hadn't asked for it.
Revised:  I'm not expecting much from foreign nations because we hadn't asked for it.
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Original: The state of Massachusetts unveiled plans to dump Microsoft Office, instead switching to an open document format currently implemented by many open source groups.
Revised: The state of Massachusetts unveiled plans to officially end use of Microsoft Office, instead switching to an open document format currently implemented by many open source groups.
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Original:  The OpenDocument format is supported by many software suites, including OpenOffice and Star Office .
Revised:  The OpenDocument format is supported by many software suites, including OpenOffice and StarOffice .
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Original: The state of Massachusetts unveiled plans to officially end use of Microsoft Office , instead switching to an open document format currently implemented by many open source groups.
Revised: The state of Massachusetts unveiled plans to officially end use of the Microsoft Office suite , instead switching to an open document format currently implemented by many open source groups.
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Original: The state of Massachusetts unveiled plans to officially end use of Microsoft Office , instead switching to an open document format currently implemented by many open source groups.
Revised: The state of Massachusetts unveiled plans to officially end use of Microsoft Office , instead switching to an open document format currently implemented by many open-source groups.
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Original:  Ventura allowed the bill to become law without his signature, stating that he did not like how the increased cost of fuel would affect the trucking industry—potentially spurring inflation—though he felt  this was nearly balanced by the positive impact the mandate would have on agriculture in the state.
Revised:  Ventura allowed the bill to become law without his signature, stating his concern that the increased cost of fuel would affect the trucking industry—potentially spurring inflation—though he felt this was nearly balanced by the positive impact the mandate would have on agriculture in the state.
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Original:  Ventura allowed the bill to become law without his signature, stating that he did not like how the increased cost of fuel would affect the trucking industry—potentially spurring inflation—though he felt  this was nearly balanced by the positive impact the mandate would have on agriculture in the state.
Revised:  Ventura allowed the bill to become law without his signature, stating that he did not like how the increased cost of fuel would effect the trucking industry—potentially spurring inflation—though he felt this was nearly balanced by the positive impact the mandate would have on agriculture in the state.
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Original:  Ventura allowed the bill to become law without his signature, stating that he did not like how the increased cost of fuel would affect the trucking industry—potentially spurring inflation—though he felt  this was nearly balanced by the positive impact the mandate would have on agriculture in the state.
Revised:  Ventura allowed the bill to become law without his signature, stating that he did not like how the increased cost of fuel would affect the trucking industry—potentially spurring inflation—though he felt that this was nearly balanced by the positive impact the mandate would have on agriculture in the state.
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Original:  The prices of diesel and biodiesel have equalized, so the negative economic impact initially feared by Ventura may not come to pass . Positive or negative, the effect should be pennies  per gallon.
Revised:  The prices of diesel and biodiesel have equalized, so the negative economic impact initially feared by Ventura are not expected to come to pass . Positive or negative, the effect should be pennies per gallon.
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Original:  The prices of diesel and biodiesel have equalized, so the negative economic impact initially feared by Ventura may not come to pass . Positive or negative, the effect should be pennies  per gallon.
Revised:  The prices of diesel and biodiesel have equalized, so the negative economic impact initially feared by Ventura may not come to pass and the effect should be pennies per gallon.
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Original:  The prices of diesel and biodiesel have equalized, so the negative economic impact initially feared by Ventura may not come to pass . Positive or negative, the effect should be pennies  per gallon.
Revised:  The prices of diesel and biodiesel have equalized, so the negative economic impact initially feared by Ventura may not come to pass . Positive or negative, the effect should be pennies more or less per gallon.
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Original:  Also, despite the dramatic increase in capacity, biodiesel production is not yet a broad solution to shortages or high prices—in 2001, the state used 14.3 million gallons of petroleum every day.
Revised:  Despite the dramatic increase in capacity, biodiesel production is not yet a broad solution to shortages or high prices—in 2001, the state used 14.3 million gallons of petroleum every day.
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Original:  On September 29, Minnesota will become the first U.S. state to require diesel fuel sold at filling stations in the state to be blended with 2\% biodiesel.
Revised: A Sample of Biodiesel. On September 29, Minnesota will become the first U.S. state to require diesel fuel sold at filling stations in the state to be blended with 2\% biodiesel.
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Original:  Ventura allowed the bill to become law without his signature, stating his concern that the increased cost of fuel would effect the trucking industry—potentially spurring inflation—though he felt that this was nearly balanced by the positive impact the mandate would have on agriculture in the state.
Revised:  Ventura allowed the bill to become law without his signature, stating his concern that the increased cost of fuel would affect the trucking industry—potentially spurring inflation—though he felt that this was nearly balanced by the positive impact the mandate would have on agriculture in the state.
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Original: Palestinian President Mahmoud Abbas and Israeli Prime Minister Binyamin Netanyahu have agreed to meet again in 10-11 days within the region, and every two weeks thereafter, according to U.S. Middle East diplomat George Mitchell.
Revised: Palestinian President Mahmoud Abbas and Israeli Prime Minister Binyamin Netanyahu have agreed to meet again in 10–11 days within the region, and every two weeks thereafter, according to U.S. Middle East diplomat George Mitchell.
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Original:  The two leaders are engaged in the first direct talks between the nations in more than two years, hosted by Israel's ally the United States in Washington DC. Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Palestine Category:Israel Category:United States%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sources Category:Wikinews Shorts Category:September 2, 2010 Category:Middle East Category:North Ameri
Revised:  The two leaders are engaged in the first direct talks between the nations in more than two years, hosted by Israel's ally the United States in Washington Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Palestine Category:Israel Category:United States%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sources Category:Wikinews Shorts Category:September 2, 2010 Category:Middle East Category:North Ameri
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Original:  The two leaders are engaged in the first direct talks between the nations in more than two years, hosted by Israel's ally the United States in Washington DC. Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Palestine Category:Israel Category:United States%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sources Category:Wikinews Shorts Category:September 2, 2010 Category:Middle East Category:North Ameri
Revised:  The two leaders are engaged in the first direct talks between the nations in more than two years, hosted by Israel's ally the United States in Washington DC. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sources Category:Wikinews Shorts Category:September 2, 2010 Category:Middle East Category:North Ameri
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Original: Palestinian President Mahmoud Abbas and Israeli Prime Minister Binyamin Netanyahu have agreed to meet again in 10–11 days within the region, and every two weeks thereafter, according to U.S. Middle East diplomat George Mitchell.
Revised: Palestinian President Mahmoud Abbas and Israeli Prime Minister Binyamin Netanyahu have agreed to meet again in 10-11 days within the region, and every two weeks thereafter, according to U.S. Middle East diplomat George Mitchell.
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Original:  The two leaders are engaged in the first direct talks between the nations in more than two years, hosted by Israel's ally the United States in Washington , DC  
Revised:  The two leaders are engaged in the first direct talks between the nations in more than two years, hosted by Israel's ally the United States in Washington DC. 
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Original: Live updates LiveUpdate|Sep. 3, 1:21 P.M. (EST) Earl has been downgraded to a category 1 storm.
Revised: Live updates Earl has been downgraded to a category 1 storm.
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Original:  Text reads "Viva Chile[:] Bicentennial . Cardenal Caro".
Revised:  Text reads "Viva Chile[:] Bicentennial in Cardenal Caro".
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Original:  ]] More than two thousand people got together in Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas " to create with their bodies the message "Viva Chile: Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" (English: Viva Chile: Bicentennial [in] Cardenal Caro . "  Governor of Cardenal Caro Julio Ibarra organized the event in two days, gathering people from schools, neighborhoods' councils, Huasos clubs, surfers, and policemen.
Revised:  ]] More than two thousand people assembled at the Las Terrazas beach in Pichilemu to create the message "Viva Chile: Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" (English: Viva Chile: Bicentennial [in] Cardenal Caro . " Governor of Cardenal Caro Julio Ibarra organized the event in two days, gathering people from schools, neighborhoods' councils, Huasos clubs, surfers, and policemen.
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Original:  ]] More than two thousand people got together in Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas " to create with their bodies the message "Viva Chile: Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" (English: Viva Chile: Bicentennial [in] Cardenal Caro . "  Governor of Cardenal Caro Julio Ibarra organized the event in two days, gathering people from schools, neighborhoods' councils, Huasos clubs, surfers, and policemen.
Revised:  ]] More than two thousand people got together in Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas " to create with their bodies the message "Viva Chile: Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" (English: Viva Chile: Bicentennial [in] Cardenal Caro " Governor of Cardenal Caro Julio Ibarra organized the event in two days, gathering people from schools, neighborhoods' councils, Huasos clubs, surfers, and policemen.
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Original:  ]] More than two thousand people got together in Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas " to create with their bodies the message "Viva Chile: Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" (English: Viva Chile: Bicentennial [in] Cardenal Caro . "  Governor of Cardenal Caro Julio Ibarra organized the event in two days, gathering people from schools, neighborhoods' councils, Huasos clubs, surfers, and policemen.
Revised:  ]] More than two thousand people got together in Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas " to create with their bodies the message "Viva Chile: Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" (English: Viva Chile: Bicentennial [in] Cardenal Caro . " using their bodies. Governor of Cardenal Caro Julio Ibarra organized the event in two days, gathering people from schools, neighborhoods' councils, Huasos clubs, surfers, and policemen.
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Original:  ]] More than two thousand people got together in Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas " to create with their bodies the message "Viva Chile: Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" (English: Viva Chile: Bicentennial [in] Cardenal Caro . "  Governor of Cardenal Caro Julio Ibarra organized the event in two days, gathering people from schools, neighborhoods' councils, Huasos clubs, surfers, and policemen.
Revised:  ]] More than two thousand people got together in Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas " to create with their bodies the message "Viva Chile: Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" (English: Viva Chile: Bicentennial [in] Cardenal Caro . " Governor of Cardenal Caro , organized the event in two days, gathering people from schools, neighborhoods' councils, Huasos clubs, surfers, and policemen.
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