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Original: The Thai Defense Minister, Thammarak Isarangkura na Ayudhya, has announced the arrest of three  suspected of involvement in the breating to death of two marines in the troubled south of the country.
Revised: The Thai Defense Minister, Thammarak Isarangkura na Ayudhya, has announced the arrest of three suspected of involvement in the breating deaths of two marines in the troubled south of the country.
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Original: The Thai Defense Minister, Thammarak Isarangkura na Ayudhya, has announced the arrest of three  suspected of involvement in the breating to death of two marines in the troubled south of the country.
Revised: The Thai Defense Minister, Thammarak Isarangkura na Ayudhya, has announced the arrest of three suspected of involvement in the breating to death of two marines in a troubled southern region of the country.
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Original:  The plain-clothes officers, Sub-Lieutenant Vinai Nakhabut and Petty Officer Khamthon Thongeiat, were initially detained by youths , suspected of being involved in a recent shooting.
Revised:  The plain-clothes officers, Sub-Lieutenant Vinai Nakhabut and Petty Officer Khamthon Thongeiat, were detained by youths , suspected of being involved in a recent shooting.
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Original:  The plain-clothes officers, Sub-Lieutenant Vinai Nakhabut and Petty Officer Khamthon Thongeiat, were initially detained by youths , suspected of being involved in a recent shooting.
Revised:  The plain-clothes officers, Sub-Lieutenant Vinai Nakhabut and Petty Officer Khamthon Thongeiat, were initially detained by youths who suspected them of being involved in a recent shooting.
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Original:  They were tied upand detained at a local school;
Revised:  They were tied up and held at a local school;
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Original: A search in WikiNews for " Public Inquiry" will return many examples of Public Inquiries conducted by governmental organizations into issues that are often deeply controversial.
Revised: A search in WikiNews for " Inquiry" will return many examples of Public Inquiries conducted by governmental organizations into issues that are often deeply controversial.
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Original:  It will be interesting to see whether an E-Inquiry is vcapable of meeting these ideals and whether they become a common feature of internet activity
Revised:  It will be interesting to see whether an E-Inquiry is capable of meeting these ideals and whether they become a common feature of internet activity
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Original:  It automatically starts up when you load your computer 
Revised:  It automatically starts up when you load your computer .
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Original:  Recently, Google had released Google Desktop 2 (beta), software that aims to provide information on a side-bar that sticks to the right end of your screen.
Revised: left Recently, Google had released Google Desktop 2 (beta), software that aims to provide information on a side-bar that sticks to the right end of your screen.
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Original:  Along the same lines are the ability to automaticatly find Weather and Stocks you would like at the first time you open it.
Revised:  Along the same lines are the ability to automatically find Weather and Stocks you would like at the first time you open it.
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Original: Due to a poll that was voted on by Wikinewsies and Wikimedia community persons alike, the Wikimedia Board of Trustees has decided to change the licensing of Wikinews from public domain to the Creative Commons Attribution 2.5 . This licensed, known also as CC-BY 2.5, received the majority vote of 31 people (27 of whom are Wikinews contributors) .
Revised: The Wikimedia Board of Trustees has decided to change the licensing of Wikinews from public domain to the Creative Commons Attribution 2.5 . This licensed, known also as CC-BY 2.5, received the majority vote of 31 people (27 of whom are Wikinews contributors) .
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Original: Due to a poll that was voted on by Wikinewsies and Wikimedia community persons alike, the Wikimedia Board of Trustees has decided to change the licensing of Wikinews from public domain to the Creative Commons Attribution 2.5 . This licensed, known also as CC-BY 2.5, received the majority vote of 31 people (27 of whom are Wikinews contributors) .
Revised: Due to a poll that was voted on by Wikinewsies and Wikimedia community persons alike, the Wikimedia Board of Trustees has decided to change the licensing of Wikinews from public domain to the Creative Commons Attribution 2.5 , following a poll of Wikinewsies and the Wikimedia community. This license received 31 people (27 of whom are Wikinews contributors) .
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Original:  The poll, which ended September 25 , 2005 was said to of occured in order to replace releasing their work into the public domain.
Revised:  The poll, which ended September 25 2005 was said to of occured in order to replace releasing their work into the public domain.
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Original:  The poll, which ended September 25 , 2005 was said to of occured in order to replace releasing their work into the public domain.
Revised:  The poll, which ended September 25 , 2005 , was set up in response to criticisms of releasing Wikinews into the public domain.
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Original:  Wikinews releasing content into the public domain has met some criticism, most particularly how it doesn't legally exist in some countries and how it only truly exists for the U.S. government and people who died many years ago.
Revised:  Perceived disadvantages of a public domain license were particularly focused around the fact that a public domain does not exist in some countries and how it only truly exists for the U.S. government and people who died many years ago.
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Original:  However, other people liked the concept of releasing into the public domain because they view it as copyleft without worrying about licenses.
Revised:  However, other people liked the concept of releasing into the public domain because they view it as copyleft without 
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Original:  Other options in the poll included the GNU FDL, Creative Commons Sharealike, the BSD license, two proprietary Wikinews licenses, and combinations of different licenses.
Revised:  needing licenses.
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Original:  Other contributors preferred a public domain license as it could be seen as copyleft without needing licenses.
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Original:  However, the first criticism disregards the fact that Wikimedia Commons remains in the public domain, and accepts public domain files.
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Original:  Perceived disadvantages of a public domain license were particularly focused around the fact that a public domain does not exist in some countries and that it could lead to plagiarism of Wikinews stories.
Revised:  Perceived disadvantages of releasing content into public domain were particularly focused around the fact that a public domain does not exist in some countries and that it could lead to plagiarism of Wikinews stories.
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Original:  The U.S. government put forth the notion during the case that the court did not have jurisdiction to review actions of the President of the United States, due to the fact that the President's choices are intended in a setting of war to prevent the loss of lives of U.S. citizens stemming from acts of terrorism.
Revised:  The U.S. government put forth the notion during the case that the court did not have jurisdiction to review actions of the President of the United States, owing to the fact that the President's choices are intended in a setting of war to prevent the loss of lives of U.S. citizens stemming from acts of terrorism.
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Original:  The U.S. government put forth the notion during the case that the court did not have jurisdiction to review actions of the President of the United States, owing to the fact that the President's choices are intended in a setting of war to prevent the loss of lives of U.S. citizens stemming from acts of terrorism.
Revised:  The U.S. government put forth the notion during the case that the court did not have jurisdiction to review actions of the President of the United States, due to the fact that the President's choices are intended in a setting of war to prevent the loss of lives of U.S. citizens stemming from acts of terrorism.
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Original:  He wrote that the lawsuit brought up, "vital considerations of national security and of military and foreign affairs", including how the President is able to order targeted killing of terrorists that are United States citizens, without "any form of judicial process whatsoever, based on the mere assertion that he is a dangerous member of a terrorist organization."
Revised:  He wrote that the lawsuit brought up, "vital considerations of national security and of military and foreign affairs", including how the President is able to order targeted killing of terrorists who are United States citizens, without "any form of judicial process whatsoever, based on the mere assertion that he is a dangerous member of a terrorist organization."
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Original:  He wrote that the lawsuit brought up, "vital considerations of national security and of military and foreign affairs", including how the President is able to order targeted killing of terrorists who are United States citizens, without "any form of judicial process whatsoever, based on the mere assertion that he is a dangerous member of a terrorist organization."
Revised:  He wrote that the lawsuit brought up, "vital considerations of national security and of military and foreign affairs", including how the President is able to order targeted killing of terrorists that are United States citizens, without "any form of judicial process whatsoever, based on the mere assertion that he is a dangerous member of a terrorist organization."
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Original:  A huge fire at a Chilean prison in San Miguel has killed at least 83 inmates, and injured another 14, including a firefighter and three gendarmerie officers, the Chilean Health Minister Jaime Mañalich reported.
Revised:  A huge fire at a Chilean prison in San Miguel has killed at least 81 inmates, and injured another 14, including a firefighter and three gendarmerie officers, the Chilean Health Minister Jaime Mañalich reported.
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Original: Out of the big 4 main parties, tthe centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to the proposals.
Revised: Out of the big 4 main parties, the centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to the proposals.
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Original: Hasegawa, 26, from Kobe, was defending the Title he gained against Thai fighter Veeraphol Sahaprom at the Nippon Budokan in April of this year.
Revised: Hasegawa, 26, from Kobe, was defending the title he gained against Thai fighter Veeraphol Sahaprom at the Nippon Budokan in April of this year.
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Original: Argentina had  60\% possession of the ball in front of Paraguay.
Revised: Argentina had about 60\% possession of the ball in front of Paraguay.
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Original:  Three minutes later, scored the last goal of the match assisted by Messie .
Revised:  Three minutes later, scored the last goal of the match assisted by Messi .
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Original:  Two Argentine players and three Paraguayan players were in this match with 31 fouls committed. netted the first goal of the match in the 15th minute, assisted by captain  . scored the second goal for Argentina in the 27th minute, also assisted by Messi.
Revised:  Two Argentine players and three Paraguayan players were in this match with 31 fouls committed. netted the first goal of the match in the 15th minute, assisted by captain Lionel Messi . scored the second goal for Argentina in the 27th minute, also assisted by Messi.
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Original:  Argentina now faces Chile in the Copa America final on July 4 at 
Revised:  Argentina now faces Chile in the Copa America final on July 4 at Santiago
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Original:  Diesel is currently 14.21p more expensive than it was one year previously  
Revised:  Diesel is currently 14.21p more expensive than it was one year previously . 
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Original: In the United Kingdom, the prices of the motor fuel unleaded petrol have reached a record high of 121.76p a litre.
Revised: In the United Kingdom, the average price of the motor fuel unleaded petrol have reached a record high of 121.76p a litre.
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Original: In the United Kingdom, the prices of the motor fuel unleaded petrol have reached a record high of 121.76p a litre.
Revised: In the United Kingdom, the prices of the motor fuel unleaded petrol has reached a record high of 121.76p a litre.
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Original: At 125.73p a litre in price on average, diesel, another motor fuel, is approximately 8p lower than the peak of 133.25p, which was achieved in July 2008.
Revised: At 125.73p a litre in price on average, diesel, another motor fuel, is approximately eight pence lower than the peak of 133.25p, which was achieved in July 2008.
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Original:  The previous peak in the country was 121.61p a litre, which was achieved on May 12, 2010.
Revised:  The previous peak in the country was 121.61p a litre, on May 12, 2010.
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Original:  Edmund King, who is the current president of the AA, has stated: "In the past week, we have seen the average price of petrol shoot up 1.7p a litre across the UK and diesel rise 1.61p.
Revised:  Edmund King, current president of the AA, has stated: "In the past week, we have seen the average price of petrol shoot up 1.7p a litre across the UK and diesel rise 1.61p.
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Original:  At 125.73p a litre in price on average, diesel , another motor fuel , is approximately eight pence lower than the peak of 133.25p, which was achieved in July 2008.
Revised:  At 125.73p a litre on average, diesel , another motor fuel , is approximately eight pence lower than the peak of 133.25p, which was achieved in July 2008.
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Original:  At 125.73p a litre in price on average, diesel , another motor fuel , is approximately eight pence lower than the peak of 133.25p, which was achieved in July 2008.
Revised:  At 125.73p a litre in price on average, diesel motor fuel is approximately eight pence lower than the peak of 133.25p, which was achieved in July 2008.
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Original:  At 125.73p a litre in price on average, diesel , another motor fuel , is approximately eight pence lower than the peak of 133.25p, which was achieved in July 2008.
Revised:  At 125.73p a litre in price on average, diesel , another motor fuel , is approximately eight pence lower than its peak of 133.25p, which was achieved in July 2008.
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Original:  At 125.73p a litre in price on average, diesel , another motor fuel , is approximately eight pence lower than the peak of 133.25p, which was achieved in July 2008.
Revised:  At 125.73p a litre in price on average, diesel , another motor fuel , is approximately eight pence lower than the peak of 133.25p, achieved in July 2008.
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Original:  Diesel is currently 14.21p more expensive than it was one year previously .
Revised:  Diesel is currently 14.21p more expensive than it was one year ago .
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Original:  While the increases this year have been driven by a number of factors, you can't get away from the fact that we have seen five rises in fuel duty in the past two years - and we're due another one in January, plus a VAT rise.
Revised:  While the increases this year have been driven by a number of factors, you can't get away from the fact that we have seen five rises in fuel duty in the past two years — and we're due another one in January, plus a VAT rise.
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Original: In the United Kingdom, the average price of unleaded petrol motor fuel has reached a record high of 121.76p a litre.
Revised: In the United Kingdom, the average price of unleaded petrol has reached a record high of 121.76p a litre.
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Original:  The previous peak in the country was 121.61p a litre, on May 12, 2010.
Revised:  The previous peak was 121.61p a litre, on May 12, 2010.
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Original:  In comparison to last year, petrol is currently more expensive by 11.88p, according to The Automobile Association (AA).
Revised:  In comparison to last year, petrol is more expensive by 11.88p, according to The Automobile Association (AA).
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Original:  The price for fuelling a tank of 50 litres will now be more expensive by £5.94.
Revised:  The price for 50 litres will now be more expensive by £5.94.
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Original:  The price for fuelling a tank of 50 litres will now be more expensive by £5.94.
Revised:  The price for fuelling a tank of 50 litres has therefore increased by £5.94.
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Original:  At 125.73p a litre on average, diesel motor fuel is approximately eight pence lower than its  peak of 133.25p , achieved in July 2008.
Revised:  iAt 125.73p a litre on average, diesel motor fuel is approximately eight pence lower than its peak of 133.25p , achieved in July 2008.
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Original:  At 125.73p a litre on average, diesel motor fuel is approximately eight pence lower than its  peak of 133.25p , achieved in July 2008.
Revised:  At 125.73p a litre on average, diesel is approximately eight pence lower than its peak of 133.25p , achieved in July 2008.
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Original:  At 125.73p a litre on average, diesel motor fuel is approximately eight pence lower than its  peak of 133.25p , achieved in July 2008.
Revised:  At 125.73p a litre on average, diesel motor fuel is approximately eight pence lower than its July 2008 peak of 133.25p , achieved in July 2008.
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Original:  Diesel is currently 14.21p more expensive than it was one yearago .
Revised:  Diesel is currently 14.21p more expensive than last year .
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Original:  In January 2011, the prices of fuel are anticipated to increase again due to the increased value added tax rate and higher hydrocarbon oil duty prices coming into effect.
Revised:  In January 2011, the prices of fuel are anticipated to rise again due to the increased value added tax rate and higher hydrocarbon oil duty prices coming into effect.
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Original:  Who knows what the price will be come January 5  2011?
Revised:  Who knows what the price will be come January 5 , 2011?
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Revised: 95\%1 457 355 No44.05\%1 147 236 centre|550p
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Original: 95\%1 457 355 No44.05\%1 147 236 centre|550p
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Original: Ticino, Appenzell Innerrhoden, Uri, Glaris, Schwytz, Nidwald and Obwald were the six and a half cantons to reject the extension.
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Original:  All the cantons apart from Ticino, Appenzell Innerrhoden, Obwalden, Nidwalden, Glarus, Schwyz and Uri majority of those voted yes, while the others voted no . German-speaking and French-speaking parts of Switzerland had similar results;
Revised:  All the cantons apart from Ticino, Appenzell Innerrhoden, Obwalden, Nidwalden, Glarus, Schwyz and Uri . German-speaking and French-speaking parts of Switzerland had similar results;
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Original:  in previous national popular constultations , German-speaking cantons were regarded as less progressive than French-speaking ones.
Revised:  in previous national popular consultations , German-speaking cantons were regarded as less progressive than French-speaking ones.
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Original:  in previous national popular consultations , German-speaking cantons were regarded as less progressive than French-speaking ones.
Revised:  in previous national popular constultations , German-speaking cantons were regarded as less progressive than French-speaking ones.
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Original: A body has been found , close to the site of blast incidents in Stockholm, Sweden Saturday evening.
Revised: A body has been found close to the site of blast incidents in Stockholm, Sweden Saturday evening.
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Original: A body has been found , close to the site of blast incidents in Stockholm, Sweden Saturday evening.
Revised: A body has been found , close to the site of blasts in Stockholm, Sweden Saturday evening.
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Original:  A police spokesperson , Petra Sjölander , was quoted as saying: "One explosion happened at the intersection of Drottninggatan and Olof Palmes Gata, this vehicle, This was the car that exploded multiple times.
Revised:  Police spokesperson Petra Sjölander , was quoted as saying: "One explosion happened at the intersection of Drottninggatan and Olof Palmes Gata, this vehicle, This was the car that exploded multiple times.
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Original:  A police spokesperson , Petra Sjölander , was quoted as saying: "One explosion happened at the intersection of Drottninggatan and Olof Palmes Gata, this vehicle, This was the car that exploded multiple times.
Revised:  A police spokesperson , Petra Sjölander said "One explosion happened at the intersection of Drottninggatan and Olof Palmes Gata, this vehicle, This was the car that exploded multiple times.
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Original:  A police spokesperson , Petra Sjölander , was quoted as saying: "One explosion happened at the intersection of Drottninggatan and Olof Palmes Gata, this vehicle, This was the car that exploded multiple times.
Revised:  A police spokesperson , Petra Sjölander , was quoted as saying: "One explosion happened at the intersection of Drottninggatan and Olof Palmes Gata, 
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Original:  " At least 2 people were treated for minor injuries as a result of the first incident .
Revised:  " At least 2 people were treated for minor injuries from the first explosion .
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Original:  There are conflicting accounts concerning what may have been the causeof the first blast .
Revised:  There are conflicting accounts concerning cause .
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Original:  A second explosion occurred later, at the intersection Drottninggatan and Bryggargatan according to the same spokesperson, further describing the second explosion as 'suspicious' - "We don't know at this point what caused the second explosion, We had bomb technicians on site, but I can't give you any details of what they did."
Revised:  A second explosionfollowed at the intersection Drottninggatan and Bryggargatan according to the same spokesperson, further describing the second explosion as 'suspicious' - "We don't know at this point what caused the second explosion, We had bomb technicians on site, but I can't give you any details of what they did."
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Original:  A second explosion occurred later, at the intersection Drottninggatan and Bryggargatan according to the same spokesperson, further describing the second explosion as 'suspicious' - "We don't know at this point what caused the second explosion, We had bomb technicians on site, but I can't give you any details of what they did."
Revised:  A second explosion occurred later, at the intersection Drottninggatan and Bryggargatan according to the same spokesperson, who called this 'suspicious' - "We don't know at this point what caused the second explosion, We had bomb technicians on site, but I can't give you any details of what they did."
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