wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: ]] Rank-size distribution is the distribution of size by rank, in decreasing order of size.
Revised: ]] Rank–size distribution is the distribution of size by rank, in decreasing order of size.
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Original:  This is also known as the rank-frequency distribution, when the source data are from a frequency distribution.
Revised:  This is also known as the rank–frequency distribution, when the source data are from a frequency distribution.
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Original:  A rank-size distribution is not a probability distribution or cumulative distribution function.
Revised:  A rank–size distribution is not a probability distribution or cumulative distribution function.
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Original:  A rank-size (or rank-frequency ) distribution is often segmented into ranges.
Revised:  A rank–size (or rank–frequency ) distribution is often segmented into ranges.
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Original:  This is the rank-size distribution.
Revised:  This is the rank–size distribution.
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Original:  If so, the rank-size rule has possibly helped spot another power law relationship.
Revised:  If so, the rank–size rule has possibly helped spot another power law relationship.
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Original:  Known exceptions to simple rank-size distributions While Zipf's law works well in many cases, it tends to not fit the largest cities in many countries;
Revised:  Known exceptions to simple rank–size distributions While Zipf's law works well in many cases, it tends to not fit the largest cities in many countries;
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Original: Zipf's Law, or the Rank-Size Distribution A 2004 study showed that Zipf's law did not work well for the five largest cities in six countries.
Revised: Zipf's Law, or the Rank–Size Distribution A 2004 study showed that Zipf's law did not work well for the five largest cities in six countries.
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Original:  When considering the entire distribution of cities, including the smallest ones, the rank-size rule does not hold.
Revised:  When considering the entire distribution of cities, including the smallest ones, the rank–size rule does not hold.
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Original:  The rank-size rule is a common standard by which urban primacy is established.
Revised:  The rank–size rule is a common standard by which urban primacy is established.
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Original:  A distribution such as that in the United States or China does not exhibit a pattern of primacy, but countries with a dominant "primate city" clearly vary from the rank-size rule in the opposite manner.
Revised:  A distribution such as that in the United States or China does not exhibit a pattern of primacy, but countries with a dominant "primate city" clearly vary from the rank–size rule in the opposite manner.
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Original:  The Use of Agent-Based Models in Regional Science—an agent-based simulation study that explains Rank-size distribution.
Revised:  The Use of Agent-Based Models in Regional Science—an agent-based simulation study that explains rank–size distribution.
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Original: The Kingdom of Waalo or Walo (formerly ) was a kingdom on the lower Senegal River in West Africa, in what are now Senegal and Mauritania.
Revised: Walo (; ) was a kingdom on the lower Senegal River in West Africa, in what are now Senegal and Mauritania.
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Original: Walo ( ; ) was a kingdom on the lower Senegal River in West Africa, in what are now Senegal and Mauritania.
Revised: Walo ( was a kingdom on the lower Senegal River in West Africa, in what are now Senegal and Mauritania.
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Original:  The mysterious figure went on to rule the kingdom of Jolof .
Revised:  The mysterious figure went on to rule the Jolof Empire .
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Original: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof   1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar  1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek  1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy  1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
Revised: Kings of Waalo 1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar 1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek 1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy 1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
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Original: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof   1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar  1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek  1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy  1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
Revised: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof 1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar 1674 1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek 1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy 1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
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Original: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof   1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar  1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek  1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy  1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
Revised: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof 1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar 1708 38 N'dyak Aram Bakar Teedyek 1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy 1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
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Original: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof   1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar  1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek  1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy  1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
Revised: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof 1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar 1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek 1708 1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy 1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
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Original: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof   1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar  1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek  1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy  1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
Revised: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof 1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar 1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek 1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 40 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy 1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
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Original: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof   1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar  1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek  1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy  1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
Revised: Kings of Waalo after the fall of Jolof 1674 –1708 Naatago Aram Bakar 1708 –1733 Njak Aram Bakar Teedyek 1733 –1734 Yerim Nadate Bubu 1734 –1735 Meu Mbody Kumba Khedy 1734 1735 –1736 Yerim Khode Fara Mboj 1736 – 1780 Njak Xuri Yop 1780–1795?
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Original:  October 1840 Fara Penda Adam Sal Mboj first November 1840 – February 1855 Mö Mboj Maalik Mboj
Revised:  October 1840 Fara Penda Adam Sal Mboj first November 1840 1855 Mö Mboj Maalik Mboj
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Original:  October 1840 Fara Penda Adam Sal Mboj first November 1840 – February 1855 Mö Mboj Maalik Mboj
Revised:  October 1840 Fara Penda Adam Sal Mboj first November 1840 – February 1855 
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Original:  In response, Macdonald used a privy council order to enact the new legislation, formally creating the North West Mounted Police with the intention of mobilising the force and deploying it early the next year.
Revised:  In response, Macdonald used a privy council order to enact the new legislation, formally creating the North West Mounted Police with the intention of mobilizing the force and deploying it early the next year.
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Original:  The teams made only 15 or miles a day at most, travelling under unpleasant and arduous conditions, made more difficult by the NWMP teamsters having little experience and the horses being unsuitable for draught work.;
Revised:  The teams made only a day at most, travelling under unpleasant and arduous conditions, made more difficult by the NWMP teamsters having little experience and the horses being unsuitable for draught work.;
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Original:  On 29 July, the badly depleted A division , including those men suffering from dysentery, was left behind as the main force turned off the southerly trail and across the much drier and rougher plains to the north-west.;
Revised:  On 29 July, the badly depleted A Division , including those men suffering from dysentery, was left behind as the main force turned off the southerly trail and across the much drier and rougher plains to the north-west.;
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Original:  Another detachment of the sicker men and livestock were left behind at Old Wives Lakes .
Revised:  Another detachment of the sicker men and livestock were left behind at Old Wives Lake .
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Original:  French abandoned the plan to move further towards Whoop-Up and instead travelled 70 miles south towards the Sweet Grass Hills, close to the border, where supplies could be bought from the United States.;
Revised:  French abandoned the plan to move further towards Whoop-Up and instead travelled south towards the Sweet Grass Hills, close to the border, where supplies could be bought from the United States.;
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Original:  The NWMP had received new orders from Ottawa to garrison the area and settled down to build Fort Macleod on an island in Old Man's River.
Revised:  The NWMP had received new orders from Ottawa to garrison the area and settled down to build Fort Macleod on an island in Oldman River.
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Original:  In response, Macdonald used a privy council order to enact the new legislation, formally creating the North West Mounted Police with the intention of mobilizing the force and deploying it early the next year.
Revised:  In response, Macdonald used a privy council order to enact the new legislation, formally creating the North-West Mounted Police with the intention of mobilizing the force and deploying it early the next year.
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Original: upright=1.2]|Mounted policeman in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien The North-West Mounted Police (NWMP) made their initial journey to the Canadian prairies in  March West, between July 8 and October 9  1874.
Revised: upright=1.2]|Mounted policeman in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien The North-West Mounted Police (NWMP) made their initial journey to the Canadian prairies in the March West, between July 8 and October 9 1874.
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Original: upright=1.2]|Mounted policeman in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien The North-West Mounted Police (NWMP) made their initial journey to the Canadian prairies in  March West, between July 8 and October 9  1874.
Revised: upright=1.2]|Mounted policeman in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien The North-West Mounted Police (NWMP) made their initial journey to the Canadian prairies in March West, between July 8 and October 9 , 1874.
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Original:  The force was deployed to the Alberta border in response to the Cypress Hills Massacre and subsequent fears of a United States military intervention.
Revised:  The force was deployed to what is now southern Alberta in response to the Cypress Hills Massacre and subsequent fears of a United States military intervention.
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Original:  The force was deployed to the Alberta border in response to the Cypress Hills Massacre and subsequent fears of a United States military intervention.
Revised:  The force was deployed to the Alberta border in response to the Cypress Hills Massacre and subsequent fears of a US military intervention.
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Original:  Background [[File:The Start From Fort Dufferin, 1874.jpg|Mounted police preparing to leave Fort Dufferin in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien]] Sir John  Macdonald acquired approval for his new force on May 23  1873, after Parliament, following a cursory debate, passed the Mounted Police Act into law unopposed.;
Revised:  Background [[File:The Start From Fort Dufferin, 1874.jpg|Mounted police preparing to leave Fort Dufferin in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien]] Sir John A. Macdonald acquired approval for his new force on May 23 1873, after Parliament, following a cursory debate, passed the Mounted Police Act into law unopposed.;
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Original:  Background [[File:The Start From Fort Dufferin, 1874.jpg|Mounted police preparing to leave Fort Dufferin in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien]] Sir John  Macdonald acquired approval for his new force on May 23  1873, after Parliament, following a cursory debate, passed the Mounted Police Act into law unopposed.;
Revised:  Background [[File:The Start From Fort Dufferin, 1874.jpg|Mounted police preparing to leave Fort Dufferin in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien]] Sir John Macdonald acquired approval for his new force on May 23 , 1873, after Parliament, following a cursory debate, passed the Mounted Police Act into law unopposed.;
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Original:  In June 1873, around 30 members of the Assiniboine First Nation were killed in the Cypress Hills Massacre, creating a national furore.
Revised:  In June 1873, around 30 Assiniboines were killed in the Cypress Hills Massacre, creating a national furore.
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Original:  In response, Macdonald used a privy council order to enact the new legislation, formally creating the North-West Mounted Police with the intention of mobilizing the force and deploying it early the next year.
Revised:  In response, Macdonald used a privy council order to implement the new legislation, formally creating the North-West Mounted Police with the intention of mobilizing the force and deploying it early the next year.
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Original:  In response, Macdonald used a privy council order to enact the new legislation, formally creating the North-West Mounted Police with the intention of mobilizing the force and deploying it early the next year.
Revised:  In response, Macdonald used a privy council order to enact the new legislation, formally creating the NWMP with the intention of mobilizing the force and deploying it early the next year.
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Original:  A report then arrived from Alexander Morris, the Lieutenant Governor of the North-West Territories, blaming the massacre on the activities of whiskey traders at Fort Whoop-Up;
Revised:  A report then arrived from Alexander Morris, the Lieutenant Governor of the North-West Territories, blaming the massacre on the activities of whisky traders at Fort Whoop-Up;
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Original:  Macdonald's Conservative government then fell from power over the Pacific Scandal ,(Macdonald resigned as prime minister on 5 November 1873). and was replaced  by the Liberal administration of Alexander Mackenzie, who placed more credence on Morris's reports and had his own moral concerns about the whiskey trade.
Revised:  Macdonald's Conservative government then fell from power over the Pacific Scandal and was replaced by the Liberal administration of Alexander Mackenzie, who placed more credence on Morris's reports and had his own moral concerns about the whiskey trade.
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Original:  Macdonald's Conservative government then fell from power over the Pacific Scandal ,(Macdonald resigned as prime minister on 5 November 1873). and was replaced  by the Liberal administration of Alexander Mackenzie, who placed more credence on Morris's reports and had his own moral concerns about the whiskey trade.
Revised:  Macdonald's Conservative government then fell from power over the Pacific Scandal ,(Macdonald resigned as prime minister on 5 November 1873). and was replaced by the Liberal administration of Alexander Mackenzie, who placed more credence on Morris's reports and had his own moral concerns about the whisky trade.
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Original:  These worries were amplified by calls from Washington for Ottawa to secure the frontier and so prevent American Indians from purchasing whiskey in Canada.
Revised:  These worries were amplified by calls from Washington for Ottawa to secure the frontier and so prevent American Indians from purchasing whisky in Canada.
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Original:  Mackenzie initially suggested sending a joint Canadian-United States military expedition, but, after Governor General Lord Dufferin and others noted the serious implications of inviting the United States Army to deploy into Canadian territory, he instead agreed to deploy the new mounted police to carry out the operation.
Revised:  Mackenzie initially suggested sending a joint Canadian-United States military expedition, but, after Governor General Lord Dufferin and others noted the serious implications of inviting the US Army to deploy into Canadian territory, he instead agreed to deploy the new mounted police to carry out the operation.
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Original:  Morris disagreed with this approach, arguing that it might encourage an attack by the Sioux First Nation , and encouraged the NWMP to take a more northerly route.
Revised:  Morris disagreed with this approach, arguing that it might encourage an attack by the Sioux , and encouraged the NWMP to take a more northerly route.
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Original:  The police in Dead Horse Valley in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien The NWMP finally left Fort Dufferin on 8 July 1874.
Revised:  The police in Dead Horse Valley in 1874, depicted by Henri Julien The NWMP finally left Fort Dufferin on July 8, 1874.
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Original:  On 29 July , the badly depleted A Division, including those men suffering from dysentery, was left behind as the main force turned off the southerly trail and across the much drier and rougher plains to the north-west.;
Revised:  On July 29 , the badly depleted A Division, including those men suffering from dysentery, was left behind as the main force turned off the southerly trail and across the much drier and rougher plains to the north-west.;
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Original:  On 24 August the expedition reached the Cypress Hills, where the weather turned wet and cold, and the expedition's horses began to die.
Revised:  On August 24 the expedition reached the Cypress Hills, where the weather turned wet and cold, and the expedition's horses began to die.
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Original:  When the police arrived at Fort Whoop-Up on 9 October , they were prepared for a battle, but the whiskey traders were aware that they were coming and had long since moved on.;
Revised:  When the police arrived at Fort Whoop-Up on October 9 , they were prepared for a battle, but the whiskey traders were aware that they were coming and had long since moved on.;
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Original:  When the police arrived at Fort Whoop-Up on 9 October , they were prepared for a battle, but the whiskey traders were aware that they were coming and had long since moved on.;
Revised:  When the police arrived at Fort Whoop-Up on 9 October , they were prepared for a battle, but the whisky traders were aware that they were coming and had long since moved on.;
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Original:  study of ants Ethology -
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Original:  study of animal behavior and its underlying mechanistic control by the nervous system Ornithology -
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Original:  study of parasites, their hosts, and the relationship between them Helminthology – parasitic worms (helminths) Planktology - study of plankton, various small drifting plants, animals and microorganisms that inhabit bodies of water Primatology - study of primates Protozoology - study of study of protozoan, the "animal-like" (i.e., motile and heterotrophic) protists  Endocrinology - study of endocrine systems Nematology - study of nematodes (roundworms)
Revised:  study of parasites, their hosts, and the relationship between them Helminthology – parasitic worms (helminths) Planktology - study of plankton, various small drifting plants, animals and microorganisms that inhabit bodies of water Primatology - study of primates Protozoology - study of study of protozoan, the "animal-like" (i.e., motile and heterotrophic) protists Endocrinology - study of endocrine systems Paleozoology - study of nematodes (roundworms)
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Original:  study of study of protozoan, the "animal-like" (i.e., motile and heterotrophic) protists Nematology -
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Original:  study of environmental effects on animal behaviors Endocrinology - study of endocrine systems Paleozoology - the branche of Paleontology that studies animal remains Neuroethology - study of animal behavior and its underlying mechanistic control by the nervous system Ethology - study of animal behaviour, usually with a focus on behaviour under natural conditions, and viewing behaviour as an evolutionarily adaptive trait Zooarchaeology - study of animal remains in relation to ancient people
Revised:  study of environmental effects on animal behaviors Endocrinology - study of endocrine systems Paleozoology - the branch of Paleontology that studies animal remains Neuroethology - study of animal behavior and its underlying mechanistic control by the nervous system Ethology - study of animal behaviour, usually with a focus on behaviour under natural conditions, and viewing behaviour as an evolutionarily adaptive trait Zooarchaeology - study of animal remains in relation to ancient people
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Original: Bowen, p. 68<ref name="Bernstein">William J. Bernstein (2008) A Splendid Exchange: How Trade Shaped the World.
Revised: Bowen, p. 68William J. Bernstein (2008) A Splendid Exchange: How Trade Shaped the World.
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Original:  URL pp. 191 
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Original:  Many members of the Saudi royal family descend maternally from the tribe , which is distributed throughout Saudi Arabia and the Middle East.
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Original: The Otaibah (, also spelled Otaiba, Utaybah) is the biggest tribe of the Arabic region originating in Saudi Arabia . which is distributed throughout Saudi Arabia and the Middle East.
Revised: The Otaibah (, also spelled Otaiba, Utaybah) is the biggest tribe of the Arabic region originating in the Arabian Peninsula . which is distributed throughout Saudi Arabia and the Middle East.
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Original: Borders For each country, the  lock and key  border situation has posed unique problems for international relations, especially in trade and control of regions surrounding the Senegal–Gambia border.
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Original: Borders For each country, the  lock and key  border situation has posed unique problems for international relations, especially in trade and control of regions surrounding the Senegal–Gambia border.
Revised: Borders For each country, the lock and key " border situation has posed unique problems for international relations, especially in trade and control of regions surrounding the Senegal–Gambia border.
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Original:  Specific threats came from Kwame Nkrumah's Ghana, Moussa Traoré's Mali, Ahmed Sekou Touré's Guinea, João Bernardo Vieira's Guinea-Bissau, and Muammar al-Gaddafi's Libya.
Revised:  Specific threats came from Kwame Nkrumah's Ghana, Moussa Traoré's Mali, Ahmed Sékou Touré's Guinea, João Bernardo Vieira's Guinea-Bissau, and Muammar al-Gaddafi's Libya.
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