wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  His death and the inability of the sons of Abdullahi 1 to win the Sao wars led to a suspension of patrilineal succession.
Revised:  His death and the inability of the sons of Abdullahi I to win the Sao wars led to a suspension of patrilineal succession.
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Original: Daoud was the half brother of the 14th century Kanem poet, farmer, and emperor Idris I of Kanem.
Revised: Daoud was the half brother of the 14th century Kanem and emperor Idris I of Kanem.
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Original: Daoud was the half brother of the 14th century Kanem and emperor Idris I of Kanem.
Revised: Daoud was the half brother of the 14th century Kanem emperor Idris I of Kanem.
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Original:   Sea turtles Newly deposited sand can harden and complicate nest-digging for turtles.
Revised:  DOES THIS WORK Sea turtles Newly deposited sand can harden and complicate nest-digging for turtles.
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Original:   Erosion A wide beach is a good energy absorber, which is significant in low-lying areas where sever storms can impact upland structures.
Revised:  Erosion A wide beach is a good energy absorber, which is significant in low-lying areas where severe storms can impact upland structures.
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Original:  Seafloor habitat in both source and target areas are disrupted, e.g. , when sand is deposited on coral reefs or when deposited sand hardens.
Revised:  Seafloor habitat in both source and target areas are disrupted, e.g. when sand is deposited on coral reefs or when deposited sand hardens.
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Original: Beach nourishment (also referred to as beach renourishment,U.S. Supreme Court Case Stop the Beach Renourishment v. Florida Department of Environmental Protection refers to the practice as beach renourishment rather than beach nourishment. beach replenishment, or sand replenishment) describes a process by which sediment, usually sand, lost through longshore drift or erosion is replaced from other sources.
Revised: Beach nourishedment (also referred to as beach renourishment,U.S. Supreme Court Case Stop the Beach Renourishment v. Florida Department of Environmental Protection refers to the practice as beach renourishment rather than beach nourishment. beach replenishment, or sand replenishment) describes a process by which sediment, usually sand, lost through longshore drift or erosion is replaced from other sources.
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Original: William White (born February 19, 1966) from Lima, OH. Powell, OhioFormer Ohio State Buckeyes cornerback William White to begin new treatment for ALS Retrieved 2018-05-21. is a former American football safety who played eleven seasons in the National Football League from 1988-1998.
Revised: William White (born February 19, 1966) from Powell, OhioFormer Ohio State Buckeyes cornerback William White to begin new treatment for ALS Retrieved 2018-05-21. is a former American football safety who played eleven seasons in the National Football League from 1988-1998.
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Original: He now lives in Ohio with one son and one daughter.
Revised: He now lives in Ohio with two sons and one daughter.
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Original: Moral nihilism broadly today tends to take the form of an Error Theory: The view developed originally by J.L. Mackie in his 1977 book Ethics: Inventing Right and Wrong.
Revised: Moral nihilism today broadly tends to take the form of an Error Theory: The view developed originally by J.L. Mackie in his 1977 book Ethics: Inventing Right and Wrong.
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Original:  Its origins from the Bodrum area having two masts, a bow spirit and lateen sails.
Revised:  Its origins from the Bodrum area having two masts, a bowsprit and lateen sails.
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Original:  Tirhandils are workhorses of the Mediterranean last 2 thousand years and is similar to its cousin, the caique, and the Greek transport vessel called perama.
Revised:  Tirhandils have been the workhorses of the Mediterranean last 2 thousand years and is similar to its cousin, the caique, and the Greek transport vessel called perama.
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Original:  Tirhandils are workhorses of the Mediterranean last 2 thousand years and is similar to its cousin, the caique, and the Greek transport vessel called perama.
Revised:  Tirhandils are workhorses of the Mediterranean for the last two thousand years and is similar to its cousin, the caique, and the Greek transport vessel called perama.
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Original:  It is beak-nosed with a scoop stern and sample interior capacity.
Revised:  It is beak-nosed with a scoop stern and simple interior capacity.
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Original: Overview Frontispiece of Leviathan, 1651 In geopolitics, a polity can be manifested in different forms such as a state, an empire, an international organization, a political organization and other identifiable, resource-manipulating organizational structures.
Revised: Overview upFrontispiece of Leviathan, 1651 In geopolitics, a polity can be manifested in different forms such as a state, an empire, an international organization, a political organization and other identifiable, resource-manipulating organizational structures.
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Original: A polity is an identifiable political entity—any group of people who have a collective identity, who are organized by some form of institutionalized social relations, and have a capacity to mobilize resources.
Revised: uk polity is an identifiable political entity—any group of people who have a collective identity, who are organized by some form of institutionalized social relations, and have a capacity to mobilize resources.
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Original: uk polity is an identifiable political entity—any group of people who have a collective identity, who are organized by some form of institutionalized social relations, and have a capacity to mobilize resources.
Revised: A polity is an identifiable political entity—any group of people who have a collective identity, who are organized by some form of institutionalized social relations, and have a capacity to mobilize resources.
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Original: A polity can also be defined either as a faction within a larger ( usually state) entity or at different times as the entity itself.
Revised: A polity can also be defined either as a faction within a larger ( usual state) entity or at different times as the entity itself.
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Original:  A corporation, for instance, is capable of marshalling resources, has a governance structure, legal rights  and exclusive jurisdiction over internal decision making.
Revised:  A corporation, for instance, is capable of marshalling resources, has a governance structure, legal rights , and exclusive jurisdiction over internal decision making.
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Original:  An ethnic community within a country or subnational entity may be a polity if they have sufficient organization and cohesive interests that can be furthered by such  organization
Revised:  An ethnic community within a country or subnational entity may be a polity if they have sufficient organization and cohesive interests that can be furthered by such an organization
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Original:  An ethnic community within a country or subnational entity may be a polity if they have sufficient organization and cohesive interests that can be furthered by such organization  
Revised:  An ethnic community within a country or subnational entity may be a polity if they have sufficient organization and cohesive interests that can be furthered by such organization . 
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Original:  An ethnic community within a country or subnational entity may be a polity if they have sufficient organization and cohesive interests that can be furthered by such organization  
Revised:  An ethnic community within a country or subnational entity may be a polity if they have sufficient organization and cohesive interests that can be furthered by such organization e
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Original:  His doctrine became known as Christianity .
Revised:  True gratitude comes from accepting Christ and believing that in Him you will have everything you need .
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Original:  The role of positive psychology can have a great impact on the many aspects of one's life  .
Revised:  The role of positive psychology can have a great impact on the many aspects of one's life . Human beings have a great ability to adapt, we can adapt to both the good and the bad that may happen in life. Usually in life, circumstances do not hold a long lasting affect on one's mood .
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Original: Basutoland was a British Crown colony established in 1884 due to the Cape Colony's inability to  control the territory.
Revised: Basutoland was a British Crown colony that existed from 1884 due to the Cape Colony's inability to control the territory.
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Original: Basutoland was a British Crown colony established in 1884 due to the Cape Colony's inability to  control the territory.
Revised: Basutoland was a British Crown colony established in 1884 to control the territory.
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Original:  Basutoland was renamed the Kingdom of Lesotho upon  its independence from the United Kingdom on 4 October 1966.
Revised:  Basutoland was renamed the Kingdom of Lesotho upon Basutoland gained its independence from the United Kingdom on 4 October 1966.
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Original:  Their King , Moshoeshoe I, sought British protection.
Revised:  Their king , Moshoeshoe I, sought British protection.
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Original:  On 29 August 1865, he wrote to Sir Philip Wodehouse, the Governor of Cape Colony: File:1963 Basutoland R1 mohair.jpg|160px|Postage stamp with a portrait of Queen Elizabeth II, 1963 Eventually, in January 1868, the Governor received a document dated 9 December 1867, signed by the Secretary of State for the Colonies, authorizing the annexation of Basutoland to the Colony of Natal (not to the Cape as Wodehouse had wished).
Revised:  On 29 August 1865, he wrote to Sir Philip Wodehouse, the Governor of Cape Colony: Eventually, in January 1868, the Governor received a document dated 9 December 1867, signed by the Secretary of State for the Colonies, authorizing the annexation of Basutoland to the Colony of Natal (not to the Cape as Wodehouse had wished).
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Original:   Executive branch Population
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Original:  Basutoland was thus brought under the direct authority of the Queen, with legislative and executive powers vested in the High Commissioner    .
Revised:  Basutoland was thus brought under the direct authority of the Queen, with legislative and executive powers vested in the High Commissioner . .
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Original:  Cape Colony rule proved unpopular with the people, and by  an Order in Council dated 2 February 1884, and brought into force on 18 March 1884,S.R.O. & S.I. Rev. III, 79 royal assent was given to a Cape bill repealing the Act of 1871.
Revised:  Cape Colony rule proved unpopular with the people, and by By an Order in Council dated 2 February 1884, and brought into force on 18 March 1884,S.R.O. & S.I. Rev. III, 79 royal assent was given to a Cape bill repealing the Act of 1871.
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Original:  In exercising these, he was required in most cases to consult either with the Executive Council or with the Resident Commissioner, a Council member of the Executive and a member of the Basuto Nation appointed by himself.
Revised:  In exercising these, he was required in most cases to consult either with the Executive Council or with the Resident Commissioner, a Council member of the Executive and a member of the Basotho Nation appointed by himself.
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Original:  The majority lived in the district between the Maloti mountains and the Caledon river .
Revised:  The majority lived in the district between the Maloti Mountains and the Caledon river .
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Original:  The majority lived in the district between the Maloti mountains and the Caledon river .
Revised:  The majority lived in the district between the Maloti mountains and the Caledon River .
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Original:  The completion in October 1905 of a railway putting Maseru in connexion with the South African railway system proved a great boon to the community.
Revised:  The completion in October 1905 of a railway connecting Maseru with the South African railway system proved a great boon to the community.
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Original:  Basutoland was a British Crown colony that existed from 1884 to 1966 in present-day Lesotho.
Revised: + Basutoland was a British Crown colony that existed from 1884 to 1966 in present-day Lesotho.
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Original:  The exact timezone was in fact GMT −0h 43m 08s (based on the longitude of Monrovia) until it was redefined as GMT−0:44 on March 1, 1919.
Revised:  The exact timezone was GMT −0h 43m 08s (based on the longitude of Monrovia) until it was redefined as GMT−0:44 on March 1, 1919.
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Original:  The exact timezone was GMT −0h 43m 08s (based on the longitude of Monrovia) until it was redefined as GMT−0:44 on March 1, 1919.
Revised:  The exact time zone was GMT −0h 43m 08s (based on the longitude of Monrovia) until it was redefined as GMT−0:44 on March 1, 1919.
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Original:  UTC−00:44 was used in Liberia until January 7, 1972.
Revised: History UTC−00:44 was used in Liberia until January 7, 1972.
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Original:  Imatinib, an intracellualar tyrosine kinase inhibitor, was developed to treat chronic myelogenous leukemia, a disease characterized by the formation of a specific abnormal tyrosine kinase.
Revised:  Imatinib, an intracellular tyrosine kinase inhibitor, was developed to treat chronic myelogenous leukemia, a disease characterized by the formation of a specific abnormal tyrosine kinase.
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Original:  A solution of Formalin is often used to fix tissue, but other methods may be used.
Revised:  A solution of formalin is often used to fix tissue, but other methods may be used.
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Original:  300px|The direct method of immunohistochemical staining uses one labelled antibody, which binds directly to the antigen being stained for. 300px|The indirect method of immunohistochemical staining uses one antibody against the antigen being probed for, and a second, labelled, antibody against the first.
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Original:  This is particularly useful when a researcher is labeling more than one primary antibody, wether due to polyclonal selection producing an array of primary antibodies for a singular antigen or when there is interest in multiple antigens.
Revised:  This is particularly useful when a researcher is labeling more than one primary antibody, whether due to polyclonal selection producing an array of primary antibodies for a singular antigen or when there is interest in multiple antigens.
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Original: Dutch National Archive , object number: VEL0759.
Revised: Dutch National Archives , object number: VEL0759.
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Original:  Yu currently heads PDP Cares , the humanitarian arm of PDP-Laban .
Revised:  Yu currently heads PDP Cares .
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Original:  Pimentel was one of the first ranking public officials who drew flak for breaching COVID-19 quarantine protocols in the Philippines 
Revised:  Pimentel was one of the first ranking public officials who drew flak for breaching COVID-19 quarantine protocols in the Philippines .
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Original:  In Nov 2016, Pimentel told Palace Communications Secretary Martin Andanar  "Review your history.", after Andanar referred to Anti-Marcos protesters who opposed the hero's burial of the late dictator as "temperamental brats".
Revised:  In November 2016, Pimentel told Palace Communications Secretary Martin Andanar "Review your history.", after Andanar referred to Anti-Marcos protesters who opposed the hero's burial of the late dictator as "temperamental brats".
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Original:  In Nov 2016, Pimentel told Palace Communications Secretary Martin Andanar  "Review your history.", after Andanar referred to Anti-Marcos protesters who opposed the hero's burial of the late dictator as "temperamental brats".
Revised:  In Nov 2016, Pimentel told Palace Communications Secretary Martin Andanar , "Review your history.", after Andanar referred to Anti-Marcos protesters who opposed the hero's burial of the late dictator as "temperamental brats".
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Original:  In Nov 2016, Pimentel told Palace Communications Secretary Martin Andanar  "Review your history.", after Andanar referred to Anti-Marcos protesters who opposed the hero's burial of the late dictator as "temperamental brats".
Revised:  In Nov 2016, Pimentel told Palace Communications Secretary Martin Andanar "Review your history.", after Andanar referred to anti-Marcos protesters who opposed the hero's burial of the late dictator as "temperamental brats".
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Original:  Pimentel called the protestors "principled", adding  "they come from the poorest sectors of society and therefore, cannot be labeled as "brats.
Revised:  Pimentel called the protestors "principled", adding that "they come from the poorest sectors of society and therefore, cannot be labeled as "brats.
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Original:  So Martin Andanar should review his history," In May 2017  Pimentel led 15 senators who supported the Proclamation No. 216 which placed the whole of Mindanao under Martial Law.
Revised:  So Martin Andanar should review his history," In May 2017 , Pimentel led 15 senators who supported the Proclamation No. 216 which placed the whole of Mindanao under Martial Law.
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Original:  So Martin Andanar should review his history," In May 2017  Pimentel led 15 senators who supported the Proclamation No. 216 which placed the whole of Mindanao under Martial Law.
Revised:  So Martin Andanar should review his history," In May 2017 Pimentel led 15 senators who supported Proclamation No. 216 which placed the whole of Mindanao under Martial Law.
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Original:  This opinion was contradicted by Pimentel's father and former Senate President, Nene Pimentel, who posited  "Within 48 hours from declaration of martial law, President [Rodrigo] Duterte is obligated to submit his report in writing or in person before the Senate and the House in joint session".
Revised:  This opinion was contradicted by Pimentel's father and former Senate President, Nene Pimentel, who posited , "Within 48 hours from declaration of martial law, President [Rodrigo] Duterte is obligated to submit his report in writing or in person before the Senate and the House in joint session".
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Original:  Pimentel resigned on May 21, 2018, in order to focus on his reelection bid in the 2019 and is succeeded by Majority Leader Tito Sotto.
Revised:  Pimentel resigned on May 21, 2018, in order to focus on his reelection bid in the 2019 and was succeeded by Majority Leader Tito Sotto.
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Original:  Breaching Covid-19 Quarantine Protocol (2020–2021) On March 25, 2020, Pimentel announced that he tested positive for the coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19), amid its pandemic in the Philippines.
Revised:  Covid-19 Quarantine Protocol (2020–2021) On March 25, 2020, Pimentel announced that he tested positive for the coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19), amid its pandemic in the Philippines.
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Original:  Breaching Covid-19 Quarantine Protocol (2020–2021) On March 25, 2020, Pimentel announced that he tested positive for the coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19), amid its pandemic in the Philippines.
Revised:  Breaching Covid-19 Quarantine Protocol (2020–2021) On March 25, 2020, Pimentel announced that he tested positive for coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19), amid its pandemic in the Philippines.
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Original:  Breaching Covid-19 Quarantine Protocol (2020–2021) On March 25, 2020, Pimentel announced that he tested positive for the coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19), amid its pandemic in the Philippines.
Revised:  Breaching Covid-19 Quarantine Protocol (2020–2021) On March 25, 2020, Pimentel announced that he tested positive for the coronavirus disease 2019 (COVID-19), amid the pandemic in the Philippines.
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Original:  The National Bureau of Investigation is probing Pimentel over his possible breach of the quarantine protocols.
Revised:  The National Bureau of Investigation probed Pimentel over his possible breach of the quarantine protocols.
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Original:  On January 21, 2021, the Department of Justice (DoJ) has dismissed for lack of probable cause the complaint against Senator Koko Pimentel over his alleged quarantine breach.
Revised:  On January 21, 2021, the Department of Justice (DoJ) has dismissed for lack of probable cause the complaint against Pimentel over his alleged quarantine breach.
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Original:  The Prosecutor General said  the complaint was fatally defective as it was relied on URL The dismissal of complaints against Senator Koko Pimentel for allegedly violating quarantine regulations has cast doubt on the government's seriousness about implementing protocols amid the COVID-19 pandemic according to Atty.
Revised:  The Prosecutor General said that the complaint was fatally defective as it was relied on URL The dismissal of complaints against Senator Koko Pimentel for allegedly violating quarantine regulations has cast doubt on the government's seriousness about implementing protocols amid the COVID-19 pandemic according to Atty.
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Original:  The Prosecutor General said  the complaint was fatally defective as it was relied on URL The dismissal of complaints against Senator Koko Pimentel for allegedly violating quarantine regulations has cast doubt on the government's seriousness about implementing protocols amid the COVID-19 pandemic according to Atty.
Revised:  The Prosecutor General said the complaint was fatally defective as it was relied on URL The dismissal of complaints against Pimentel for allegedly violating quarantine regulations has cast doubt on the government's seriousness about implementing protocols amid the COVID-19 pandemic according to Atty.
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Original:  Quicho. He adds that the "dismissal by the DoJ of the quarantine breach complaint filed against Mr. Koko Pimentel places into serious doubt the government's commitment to exact accountability from those who willfully or negligently put the lives of our front liners in danger.”
Revised:  Quicho. He adds that the "dismissal by the DoJ of the quarantine breach complaint filed against Pimentel places into serious doubt the government's commitment to exact accountability from those who willfully or negligently put the lives of our front liners in danger.”
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Original:  Quicho also asked  "is there a different set of rules for Mr. Koko Pimentel, the powerful and the privileged, and a different set for the fish vendor, the weak, the forgotten and the ‘unimportant’?
Revised:  Quicho also asked , "is there a different set of rules for Mr. Koko Pimentel, the powerful and the privileged, and a different set for the fish vendor, the weak, the forgotten and the ‘unimportant’?
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Original: Enamul Haque, Hakim Habibur Rahman Khan Commemoration Volume (A Collection of Essays on History, Art, Archaeology, Numismatics, Epigraphy and Literature of Bangladesh and Eastern India), The International Centre for Study of Bengal Art, Dhaka, 2001, ISBN 984-8140-03-4.
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Original:  His wide collection of manuscripts, coins, weapons and artifacts is preserved at the Dhaka University Library as the Hakim Habibur Rahman Collection.}
Revised:  His wide collection of manuscripts, coins, weapons and artefacts is preserved at the Dhaka University Library as the Hakim Habibur Rahman Collection.}
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Original:  He collected all the Arabic, Persian and Urdu books written in Bengal for more than 40 years and published a catalog titled Sulasa Ghusala.
Revised:  He collected all the Arabic, Persian and Urdu books written in Bengal for more than 40 years and published a catalogue titled Sulasa Ghusala.
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