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Original:  He said the devices at schools are not mandated by law or by the association's regulations.
Revised:  He said the devices at schools are not mandated by law nor by the association's regulations.
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Original:  His coach described him as  healthy and disciplined athlete who was the top scorer on his basketball team as well as the quarterback of the school's football team which won its conference's championship this season.
Revised:  His coach described him as a healthy and disciplined athlete who was the top scorer on his basketball team as well as the quarterback of the school's football team which won its conference's championship this season.
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Original:  125px| It is unclear from media reports whether the school had an available for emergencies, or if the ambulance personal had employed such equipment.
Revised:  125px| It is unclear from media reports whether the school had an available for emergencies, or if the ambulance personnel had employed such equipment.
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Original:  His play had cinched a perfect season for his undefeated Fennville High High School basketball team before an exuberant crowd.
Revised:  His play had cinched a perfect season for his undefeated basketball team before an exuberant crowd.
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Original:  George T. Alexander, Jr., 34, of Killeen, Texas, died at Brooke Army Medical Center, San Antonio, Texas, on Oct. 22, of injuries sustained in Samarra, Iraq, on Oct. 17, when an improvised explosive device detonated near his Bradley Fighting Vehicle.
Revised:  George T. Alexander, Jr., 34, died from injuries inflicted by a improvised explosive device detonated near his Bradley Fighting Vehicle.
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Original:  The IED had targetted the vehicle he was travelling in through Samarra, a central Iraqi town
Revised:  The explosive targeted the vehicle he was travelling in through Samarra, a central Iraqi town
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Original:  The explosive targeted the vehicle he was travelling in through Samarra, a central Iraqi town  
Revised:  The explosive targeted the vehicle he was travelling in through Samarra, a central Iraqi town . 
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Original:  The explosive targeted the vehicle he was travelling in through Samarra, a central Iraqi town .
Revised:  The explosive targeted the vehicle he was travelling in through Samarra, a central Iraqi town 
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Original:  The Pentagon further commented that this was no big deal and was to be expected, after all.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Obituaries Category:North America Category:Ir
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Original: Microsoft's Internet Explorer 6 is one of the most successful software products ever because of its durability and the massive numbers of people who have used it.
Revised: Microsoft's Internet Explorer 6 is one of the most successful software products ever as measured by its durability and the massive numbers of people who have used it.
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Original: With  Microsoft's IE9 browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for IE 6 users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser that has been replaced by three newer versions.
Revised: With Microsoft's IE9 browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for IE 6 users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser that Microsoft has replaced with three newer versions.
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Original:  On its new website, "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" Microsoft launched an ambitious campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to the new version.
Revised:  On its new website, "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" Microsoft has launched an aggressive campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to the new version.
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Original:  On its new website, "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" Microsoft launched an ambitious campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to the new version.
Revised:  On its new website, "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" Microsoft launched an ambitious campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to a new version.
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Original:  " (Ten) years ago, a browser was born.
Revised:  " Ten years ago, a browser was born.
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Original:  IE's various versions accounted for 70\% of the market in 2009 , which has dropped to approximately 56\% today.
Revised:  IE's various versions accounted for 70\% of the market in 2009 ; this has dropped to approximately 56\% today.
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Original:  Mozilla Firefox, its main rival, has been aggressively increasing market shares while the recently released Google Chrome is  quickly gaining users.
Revised:  Mozilla Firefox, its main rival, has been actively increasing its market share while the recently released Google Chrome is quickly gaining users.
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Original:  Mozilla Firefox, its main rival, has been aggressively increasing market shares while the recently released Google Chrome is  quickly gaining users.
Revised:  Mozilla Firefox, its main rival, has been aggressively increasing market shares while the recently released Google Chrome is also quickly gaining users.
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Original:  According to PC World in analyzing its own web traffic statistics: "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind Safari-and nearly tied with Chrome.
Revised:  According to PC World 's recent analysis of its own web traffic statistics: "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind Safari-and nearly tied with Chrome.
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Original: With development of Microsoft's IE9 browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for IE 6 users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser that Microsoft has replaced with three newer versions.
Revised: With development of 's browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for IE 6 users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser that Microsoft has replaced with three newer versions.
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Original: With development of Microsoft's IE9 browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for IE 6 users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser that Microsoft has replaced with three newer versions.
Revised: With development of Microsoft's IE9 browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser that Microsoft has replaced with three newer versions.
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Original:  On its new website, "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" Microsoft has launched an aggressive campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to a new version.
Revised:  On a new website, "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" Microsoft has launched an aggressive campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to a new version.
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Original:  On its new website, "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" Microsoft has launched an aggressive campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to a new version.
Revised:  On its new website, Microsoft has launched an aggressive campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to a new version.
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Original:  Mozilla Firefox , its main rival, has been actively increasing its market share while the recently released Google Chrome is also quickly gaining users.
Revised:  , its main rival, has been actively increasing its market share while the recently released Google Chrome is also quickly gaining users.
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Original:  Mozilla Firefox , its main rival, has been actively increasing its market share while the recently released Google Chrome is also quickly gaining users.
Revised:  Mozilla Firefox , its main rival, has been actively increasing its market share while the recently released is also quickly gaining users.
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Original:  According to PC World 's recent analysis of its own web traffic statistics: "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind Safari-and nearly tied with Chrome.
Revised:  According to 's recent analysis of its own web traffic statistics: "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind Safari-and nearly tied with Chrome.
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Original:  According to PC World 's recent analysis of its own web traffic statistics: "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind Safari-and nearly tied with Chrome.
Revised:  According to PC World 's recent analysis of its own web traffic statistics: "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind -and nearly tied with Chrome.
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Original:  The Internet security firm Secunia.com , has said that as of March 4, 2011, IE6 has 277 vulnerabilities;
Revised:  The Internet security firm , has said that as of March 4, 2011, IE6 has 277 vulnerabilities;
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Original:  IE 6 shipped with Windows XP , nearly a decade ago.
Revised:  IE 6 shipped with , nearly a decade ago.
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Original: With development of 's  browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser that Microsoft has replaced  with three newer versions.
Revised: With development of 's browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser . Microsoft has replaced with three newer versions.
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Original: With development of 's  browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser that Microsoft has replaced  with three newer versions.
Revised: With development of 's browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser that Microsoft has replaced it with three newer versions.
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Original:  On a new website,  Microsoft has launched an aggressive campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to a new version.
Revised:  On a new website, Microsoft has launched an aggressive campaign to persuade users to stop using IE 6 and update to a new version.
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Original:  Its mission: decrease IE6 users to less than 1\% . "[Ten] years ago, a browser was born.
Revised:  Its mission: decrease IE6 users to less than one percent . "[Ten] years ago, a browser was born.
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Original:  IE's various versions accounted for 70 \% of the market in 2009;
Revised:  IE's various versions accounted for 70 percent of the market in 2009;
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Original:  this has dropped to approximately 56 \% today.
Revised:  this has dropped to approximately 56 percent today.
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Original:  According to 's recent analysis of its own web traffic statistics : "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind -and nearly tied with Chrome.
Revised:  's recent analysis of its own web traffic statistics : "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind -and nearly tied with Chrome.
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Original:  According to 's recent analysis of its own web traffic statistics : "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind -and nearly tied with Chrome.
Revised:  According to 's recent analysis of its own web traffic statistics concluded, "Usually, Internet Explorer is the #2 browser after Firefox, but over the past 30 days it's been #3, a couple of points behind -and nearly tied with Chrome.
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Original:  Web developers face the biggest problems with IE6.
Revised:  Web developers face big problems with IE 6.
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Original:  As they design their web pages for the newer browser with the advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to also accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown"  , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browsers at risk of being hacked.
Revised:  As they design their web pages for the newer browsers with advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to also accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browsers at risk of being hacked.
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Original:  As they design their web pages for the newer browser with the advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to also accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown"  , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browsers at risk of being hacked.
Revised:  As they design their web pages for the newer browser with the advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browsers at risk of being hacked.
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Original:  As they design their web pages for the newer browser with the advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to also accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown"  , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browsers at risk of being hacked.
Revised:  As they design their web pages for the newer browser with the advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to also accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE 6 users . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browsers at risk of being hacked.
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Original:  As they design their web pages for the newer browser with the advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to also accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown"  , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browsers at risk of being hacked.
Revised:  As they design their web pages for the newer browser with the advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to also accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" site , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browsers at risk of being hacked.
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Original:  As they design their web pages for the newer browser with the advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to also accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown"  , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browsers at risk of being hacked.
Revised:  As they design their web pages for the newer browser with the advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to also accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 . Also, not mentioned on Microsoft's "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown" , are the numerous security vulnerabilities putting the browser at risk of being hacked.
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Original:  The Internet security firm , has said that as of March 4, 2011, IE6 has 277 vulnerabilities;
Revised:  The Internet security firm , has said that as of March 4, 2011, IE 6 has 277 vulnerabilities;
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Original:  Microsoft says that the latest versions of Internet Explorer with provide the user with enhanced protection from these attacks and threats.
Revised:  Microsoft says that the latest versions of Internet Explorer provide the user with enhanced protection from these attacks and threats.
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Original: With development of 's ( IE 9 ) browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser.
Revised: With development of 's ( IE9 ) browser almost complete, Microsoft announced on Friday that it is time for users to move away from the antiquated 10-year-old browser.
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Original:  On a new website, "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown", Microsoft has launched an aggressive campaign to persuade users to stop using IE 6 and update to a newer IE.
Revised:  On a new website, "The Internet Explorer 6 Countdown", Microsoft has launched an aggressive campaign to persuade users to stop using IE6 and update to a newer IE.
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Original:  Its goal is to decrease IE 6 users to less than one percent.
Revised:  Its goal is to decrease IE6 users to less than one percent.
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Original:  Web developers face big problems with IE 6.
Revised:  Web developers face big problems with IE6.
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Original:  As they design their web pages for the newer browsers with advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE 6 users.
Revised:  As they design their web pages for the newer browsers with advanced web technology and geared to the newest web core markup language , they are forced to accommodate older out-of-date technology to support IE6 users.
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Original:  The Internet security firm , has said that as of March 4, 2011, IE 6 has 277 vulnerabilities;
Revised:  The Internet security firm , has said that as of March 4, 2011, IE6 has 277 vulnerabilities;
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Original:  IE 6 shipped with , nearly a decade ago.
Revised:  IE6 shipped with , nearly a decade ago.
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Original: Internet Explorer's share of the market share is slipping.
Revised: Internet Explorer's share of the is slipping.
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Original:   Examples of contributions  include recipes, scientific findings, and other pieces of information one may wish to share.
Revised:  Examples of contributions may include recipes, scientific findings, and other pieces of information one may wish to share.
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Original:  It is reported by MarketWatch that the new service was actually online, but went down shortly after . Google Base is also expected to be a major competitor of craigslist, which is partly owned by eBay
Revised:  Google Base is also expected to be a major competitor of craigslist, which is partly owned by eBay
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Original:  It is reported by MarketWatch that the new service was actually online, but went down shortly after . Google Base is also expected to be a major competitor of craigslist, which is partly owned by eBay
Revised:  It is reported by MarketWatch that the new service was actually online, but went down shortly after . Google Base is expected to be a major competitor of craigslist, which is partly owned by eBay
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Original: Also currrently the succession can occur only in the male lineage.
Revised: Also currently the succession can occur only in the male lineage.
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Original:  Princess Sayako, the daughter of Emperor Akihito therefore will lose her princesshood after her marriage planned in the next November.
Revised:  Princess Sayako, the daughter of therefore will lose her princesshood after her marriage planned in the next November.
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Original:  CNN reported a latest census shows over 80\% supported the idea of empress in reign.
Revised:  reported a latest census shows over 80\% supported the idea of empress in reign.
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Original: Japanese media reported that Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi suggested yesterday that the goverment would submit a draft to the Diet to rewrite the Imperial Household Act within the next year.
Revised: Japanese media reported that Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi suggested yesterday that the government would submit a draft to the Diet to rewrite the Imperial Household Act within the next year.
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Original:  The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, set up by Junichiro Koizumi — on his own behalf — not as a part of the goverment, agreed on the issue that that empresses should be accepted in the future and that the line of succession would not have any gender bias.
Revised:  The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, personally appointed by the Prime Minister, reacehed and agreement on the issue that that empresses should be accepted in the future and that the line of succession would not have any gender bias.
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Original:  The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, set up by Junichiro Koizumi — on his own behalf — not as a part of the goverment, agreed on the issue that that empresses should be accepted in the future and that the line of succession would not have any gender bias.
Revised:  The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, set up by Junichiro Koizumi — on his own behalf — not as a part of the goverment, agreed on the issue that that an Empress should be accepted in the future and that the line of succession would not have any gender bias.
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Original:  The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, set up by Junichiro Koizumi — on his own behalf — not as a part of the goverment, agreed on the issue that that empresses should be accepted in the future and that the line of succession would not have any gender bias.
Revised:  The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, set up by Junichiro Koizumi — on his own behalf — not as a part of the goverment, agreed on the issue that that empresses should be accepted . Implementation of their recommendations would mean that succession to the highest position in Japanest society would occur without a gender bias.
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Original: The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, personally appointed by the Prime Minister, reacehed and agreement on the issue that that an Empress should be accepted.
Revised: The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, personally appointed by the Prime Minister, reached an agreement on the issue that that an Empress should be accepted.
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Original: The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, personally appointed by the Prime Minister, reacehed and agreement on the issue that that an Empress should be accepted.
Revised: The experts' Board on the Imperial Household Act, personally appointed by the Prime Minister, reacehed and agreement on the issue that an Empress should be accepted.
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Original:  Now Japanese Imperial Household has no male member under 20 years old, however the act gives only its male members the chance to rise to the Chrysanthemum Throne.
Revised:  At the present time, the Japanese imperial household has no male member under 20 years old, however the act gives only its male members the chance to rise to the Chrysanthemum Throne.
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