wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Danish transatlantic slave trade Trading enslaved Africans was part of the transatlantic slave trade by Denmark-Norway around 1671, when the Danish West India Company was chartered until 1 January 1803 when the 1792 law to abolish the slave trade came into effect.
Revised:  Danish transatlantic slave trade Trading African slaves was part of the transatlantic slave trade by Denmark-Norway around 1671, when the Danish West India Company was chartered until 1 January 1803 when the 1792 law to abolish the slave trade came into effect.
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Original:  Slavery in the Danish West Indies continued until 3 July 1848 when an enslaved people gathered at Frederiksted and demanded their freedom.
Revised:  Slavery in the Danish West Indies continued until 3 July 1848 when slaves gathered at Frederiksted and demanded their freedom.
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Original:  As of 1778, it was estimated annually Dano-Norwegians shipped approximately 3,000 enslaved Africans to the Danish West Indies.
Revised:  As of 1778, it was estimated annually Dano-Norwegians shipped approximately 3,000 African slaves to the Danish West Indies.
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Original:  During the 1720s, many of these enslaved Africans were sourced the Akan-region Akwamu, Ga-Adangbe in present-day Ghana, with a large number taken to the island of St Jan (now Saint John in the U.S. Virgin Islands) promptly rebelling and attempting to found an Akwamu-led nation, including one of its leaders Breffu.
Revised:  During the 1720s, many of these African slaves were sourced the Akan-region Akwamu, Ga-Adangbe in present-day Ghana, with a large number taken to the island of St Jan (now Saint John in the U.S. Virgin Islands) promptly rebelling and attempting to found an Akwamu-led nation, including one of its leaders Breffu.
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Original:  The country's ships transported approximately 100,000 enslaved Africans , about 2\% of the total number in the early 19th century.
Revised:  The country's ships transported approximately 100,000 African slaves , about 2\% of the total number in the early 19th century.
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Original: Danish transatlantic slave trade Trading African slaves was part of the transatlantic slave trade by Denmark-Norway around 1671, when the Danish West India Company was chartered until 1 January 1803 when the 1792 law to abolish the slave trade came into effect.
Revised: Danish transatlantic slave trade Trading African slaves was part of the transatlantic slave trade by Denmark-Norway around 1671, when the Danish West India Company was chartered 1 January 1803 when the 1792 law to abolish the slave trade came into effect.
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Original: Danish slave trade during the Viking Age During the Viking Age, thralls (Norse slaves) were an important part of the economy and one of the main reasons for the raids on England where slaves were captured.
Revised: Danish slave trade during the Viking Age During the Viking Age, thralls (Norse slaves) were an important part of the economy and one of the main reasons for the raids on England in which slaves were captured.
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Original:  This practice was largely abolished once Denmark became Christian in the 10th century.
Revised:  This practice was largely abandoned once Denmark became Christian in the 10th century.
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Original:  He was reportedly sold to a hermitic goatherder at seven and after the goatherder's death, he lived alone with the wolves in the Sierra Morena.
Revised:  He was sold to a hermitic goatherder at seven and after the goatherder's death, he lived alone with the wolves in the Sierra Morena.
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Original:  Biography Marcos claimed he was born in Añora, Spain the province of Cordoba.
Revised:  Biography Marcos was born in Añora, Spain the province of Cordoba.
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Original:  He emigrated with his parents to Madrid, where his mother died giving birth to their fourth child, who later died shortly thereafter.
Revised:  He emigrated with his parents to Madrid, where his mother died giving birth to their fourth child, who died shortly thereafter.
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Original: Biography Marcos was born in Añora, Spain  the province of Cordoba.
Revised: Biography Marcos was born in Añora, Spain , in the province of Cordoba.
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Original:  He emigrated with his parents to Madrid, where his mother died giving birth to their fourth child, who died shortly thereafter.
Revised:  He emigrated with his parents to Madrid, where his mother died giving birth to her fourth child, who died shortly thereafter.
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Original:  The child was to serve as a slave, but was abandoned to nature at some point after this change in guardianship .
Revised:  The child was to serve as a slave, but was left to his own devices when the landowner passed on .
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Original:  Sometimes called the "chinaman", or left-arm unorthodox, few bowlers of this type have appeared in senior cricket .
Revised:  Few bowlers of this type have appeared in senior cricket .
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Original:  Certainly , Fleetwood-Smith was the first chinaman bowler influence Australian cricket and play for the Test team.
Revised:  Certainly , Fleetwood-Smith was the first such bowler to influence Australian cricket and play for the Test team.
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Original:  She became the first Bangladeshi and first Bengali to complete the Seven Summits on 18 November 2015.
Revised:  She is the first Bangladeshi and first Bengali to complete the Seven Summits on 18 November 2015.
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Original:  She was selected in honour of her activism and commitment to empowering women through her work in the field of adventure.
Revised:  She was selected in honor of her activism and commitment to empowering women through her work in the field of adventure.
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Original:  She was again selected as one of their Emerging Explorers in 2016. becoming the only woman to hold the simultaneous title of National Geographic Explorer and Adventurer of the Year.
Revised:  She was again selected as one of their Explorers in 2016. becoming the only woman to hold the simultaneous title of National Geographic Explorer and Adventurer of the Year.
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Original:  She was again selected as one of their Emerging Explorers in 2016. becoming the only woman to hold the simultaneous title of National Geographic Explorer and Adventurer of the Year.
Revised:  She was again selected as one of their Emerging Explorers in 2016. becoming the only woman to hold the simultaneous title of National Geographic Explorer and Adventurer .
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Original:  Early life   Nazreen was born in Dhaka with the birth name Wasfia Nazreen Chowdhury.
Revised:  Early life Early years Nazreen was born in Dhaka with the birth name Wasfia Nazreen Chowdhury.
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Original:   "   On 26 March 2011, to celebrate 40 years of Bangladeshi independence, Nazreen launched the "Bangladesh on Seven Summits" Campaign.
Revised:  " Bangladesh on Seven Summits On 26 March 2011, to celebrate 40 years of Bangladeshi independence, Nazreen launched the "Bangladesh on Seven Summits" Campaign.
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Original:  Awards    Anannya Top Ten Awards ( 2015 ) External links 
Revised:  Awards “What really struck me in Wasfia’s description of her experience was that overriding feeling of gratitude, which in some way connected her to every single being. This was exactly what I experienced in space: immense gratitude for the opportunity to see Earth from this vantage, and for the gift of the planet we’ve been given. In some way I can’t explain, being physically detached from Earth made me feel deeply interconnected with everyone on it. I distinctly remember this feeling of profound thankfulness, but Wasfia’s words helped me to process that awareness of interconnectedness with the inhabitants of the planet.” Anannya Top Ten Awards ( 2015 ) External links 
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Original:  Awards    Anannya Top Ten Awards ( 2015 ) External links 
Revised:  Awards Anannya Top Ten Awards 2015 ) External links 
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Original:  Nazreen is often credited in Bangladesh history as one of their legendary women with pioneering contribution.
Revised:  Nazreen is often credited in Bangladesh history as one of the legendary women with pioneering contribution.
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Original:  She was again selected as one of their Explorers in 2016. becoming the only woman to hold the simultaneous title of National Geographic Explorer and Adventurer.
Revised:  She was again selected as one of their Explorers in 2016. becoming the only woman to hold the simultaneous titles of National Geographic Explorer and Adventurer.
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Original:  She is the youngest child and only daughter of Mahmuda Nahar (Ruby), a singer and school teacher, and Nazmee Jahan Chowdhury, an employee at James Finlay Bangladesh.
Revised:  She is the youngest child and only daughter of Mahmuda Nahar (Ruby), a singer and school teacher, and Nazmee Jahan Chowdhury, a service holder at James Finlay Bangladesh.
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Original:  Nazreen lived in Khulna, where she studied in Sunflower Nursery school and then Coronation Girls’ High School.
Revised:  Nazreen lived in Khulna, where she studied at Sunflower Nursery school and then Coronation Girls’ High School.
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Original:  When she was still a child, the family moved to their previous home in Chittagong.
Revised:  When she was still a child, the family moved to their home to Chittagong.
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Original:  Nazreen is a distant scholar at Samye Ling College of Scotland.
Revised:  Nazreen was a distant scholar at Samye Ling College of Scotland.
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Original:  She decided to quit her work in the  States and moved to the Himalayas to work with refugees instead .
Revised:  She decided to quit her work in the United States and moved to the Himalayas to work with refugees instead .
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Original:  She decided to quit her work in the  States and moved to the Himalayas to work with refugees instead .
Revised:  She decided to quit her work in the States and moved to the Himalayas to work with refugees .
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Original:  Nazreen was chosen as the first Goodwill Ambassador of BRAC (NGO), an international development organization.
Revised:  Nazreen was chosen as the first Goodwill Ambassador of BRAC (NGO), an international development organization.
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Original:  She is also the youth ambassador for JAAGO Foundation and its concern Volunteer for Bangladesh.
Revised:  She was also the youth ambassador for JAAGO Foundation and its concern Volunteer for Bangladesh.
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Original:  Since finishing climbing the seven summits, Nazreen has been hard at work on her forthcoming Ösel Foundation, which she describes as an “educational institute set in the outdoors, which integrates the latest scientific findings about development of the mind and combines it with mindfulness techniques and training in nature to empower adolescent girls.”  Nazreen represented Bangladesh in Nepal at the closing ceremony of the two Nation's first ever Business Forum in January 2016.
Revised:  Since finishing climbing the seven summits, Nazreen has been hard at work on her Ösel Foundation, which she describes as an “educational institute set in the outdoors, which integrates the latest scientific findings about development of the mind and combines it with mindfulness techniques and training in nature to empower adolescent girls.” Nazreen represented Bangladesh in Nepal at the closing ceremony of the two Nation's first ever Business Forum in January 2016.
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Original:  She dedicated it to the “Spirit of 1971 Liberation War of Bangladesh and all those who are fighting to protect it." Nazreen dedicated her successful Everest climb to the women of Bangladesh, saying  "We have achieved freedom 41 years ago, but our women are yet to enjoy freedom".
Revised:  She dedicated it to the “Spirit of 1971 Liberation War of Bangladesh and all those who are fighting to protect it." Nazreen dedicated her successful Everest climb to the women of Bangladesh, saying : "We have achieved freedom 41 years ago, but our women are yet to enjoy freedom".
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Original:   A long-time supporter of Tibet, Nazreen is close friends with the 17th Karmapa Ogyen Trinley Dorje and the 14th Dalai Lama Tenzin Gyatso.
Revised:  Nazreen likes to stay private and has often been quoted to say she shies away from social-media and the spotlight. A long-time supporter of Tibet, Nazreen is close friends with the 17th Karmapa Ogyen Trinley Dorje and the 14th Dalai Lama Tenzin Gyatso.
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Original:    Wasfia in books and documentary Nazreen  's philosophy of life is featured among five of the most adventurous souls in National Geographic's Special Publication “Adventures of a Lifetime.” %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nazreen is the subject of the 2016 documentary Wasfia made by Apple Inc. and produced by Academy Awards nominated RYOT Films.
Revised:  Even though all these experiences combined instilled the exposures required to realize firsthand who was the real boss–I think people in general in my region and culture, from time immemorial treated nature differently. For example the mountains are referred as gods and goddesses. So I always found it strange, when people so gallantly proclaim to have “conquered” an entire mountain, which is also a very patriarchal perspective if you think about it. Before summit bids on big mountains, the usual scene is that everyone’s praying and promising of things they’d do only if allowed for that one short window to open up just so we can stand on top in all her glory for a brief moment. Therefore, it’s really a process of surrendering to nature and then if it’s your time, she will most likely bless you." Wasfia in books and documentary Nazreen 's philosophy of life is featured among five of the most adventurous souls in National Geographic's Special Publication “Adventures of a Lifetime.” %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nazreen is the subject of the 2016 documentary Wasfia made by Apple Inc. and produced by Academy Awards nominated RYOT Films.
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Original:    Wasfia in books and documentary Nazreen  's philosophy of life is featured among five of the most adventurous souls in National Geographic's Special Publication “Adventures of a Lifetime.” %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nazreen is the subject of the 2016 documentary Wasfia made by Apple Inc. and produced by Academy Awards nominated RYOT Films.
Revised:  Wasfia in books and documentary 's philosophy of life is featured among five of the most adventurous souls in National Geographic's Special Publication “Adventures of a Lifetime.” %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nazreen is the subject of the 2016 documentary Wasfia made by Apple Inc. and produced by Academy Awards nominated RYOT Films.
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Original:  The documentary is currently on tour around the world and is being shown as part of the National Geographic Shortfilm Showcase.
Revised:  The documentary was on tour around the world and is being shown as part of the National Geographic Shortfilm Showcase.
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Original:  The documentary is currently on tour around the world and is being shown as part of the National Geographic Shortfilm Showcase.
Revised:  The documentary is currently on tour around the world and was shown as part of the National Geographic Shortfilm Showcase.
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Original:  I distinctly remember this feeling of profound thankfulness, but Wasfia’s words helped me to process that awareness of interconnectedness with the inhabitants of the planet.” %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nazreen and her quests are subjects of HSC exam quiz and various other school textbook contents in Bangladesh.
Revised:  I distinctly remember this feeling of profound thankfulness, but Wasfia’s words helped me to process that awareness of interconnectedness with the inhabitants of the planet.” %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  She is one of 12 Women Explorers to grace National Geographic's 2020 Explorer calendar.
Revised:  Nazreen is one of 12 Women Explorers to grace National Geographic's 2020 Explorer calendar.
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Original:  She is one of 12 Women Explorers to grace National Geographic's 2020 Explorer calendar.
Revised:  She is one of the twelve Women Explorers to grace National Geographic's 2020 Explorer calendar.
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Original:  Nazreen is often credited in Bangladesh history as one of the legendary women with pioneering contribution.
Revised:  Nazreen is credited in Bangladesh history as one of the legendary women with pioneering contribution.
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Original:  She is the youngest child and only daughter of Mahmuda Nahar (Ruby), a musician and teacher, and Nazmee Jahan Chowdhury, a service holder at James Finlay Bangladesh.
Revised:  She is the youngest child and only daughter of Mahmuda Nahar (Ruby), a musician and teacher, and Nazmee Jahan Chowdhury, an executive at James Finlay Bangladesh.
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Original:  Because of certain tragic circumstances in her childhood, Nazreen had to take care of herself from a very young age  .
Revised:  Nazreen had to take care of herself from a very young age .
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Original:  Nazreen highlighted the power of youth and importance of sustainability and mindfulness of respecting Nature .
Revised:  Nazreen highlighted the power of youth and importance of sustainability and respecting nature while developing infrastructure .
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Original:  Nazreen was part of the international movement to free Tibet and was part of some high-profile protests and uprisings, leading up to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, including  March to Tibet  and several concerts and other events throughout the globe.
Revised:  Nazreen was part of the international movement to free Tibet and was part of some high-profile protests and uprisings, leading up to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, including the March to Tibet and several concerts and other events throughout the globe.
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Original:  In 2009, with pressure from the Chinese Embassy in Bangladesh, her photography exhibition titled "Into Exile: Tibet 1949-2009" in partnership with DRIK, was shut down and she was intimidated and harassed for months by authorities  .
Revised:  In 2009, with pressure from the Chinese Embassy in Bangladesh, her photography exhibition titled "Into Exile: Tibet 1949-2009" in partnership with DRIK, was shut down in Dhaka and consequently, she was intimidated and harassed for months by authorities .
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Original:  She dedicated it to the “Spirit of 1971 Liberation War of Bangladesh and all those who are fighting to protect it." Nazreen dedicated her successful Everest climb to the women of Bangladesh, saying: "We have achieved freedom 41 years ago, but our women are yet to enjoy freedom".
Revised:  She dedicated it to the “Spirit of 1971 Liberation War of Bangladesh and all those who are fighting to protect it." Nazreen dedicated her successful Everest climb to the women of Bangladesh, saying: "We have achieved independence 41 years ago, but our women are yet to enjoy freedom".
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Original:  Nazreen started trekking to base-camp of Everest on 26 March 2012 to mark Bangladesh's Independence day.
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Original:  Nazreen became the first Bangladeshi to summit Aconcagua, South America’s highest peak and the highest peak outside of the Himalayas.
Revised:  became the first Bangladeshi to summit Aconcagua, South America’s highest peak and the highest peak outside of the Himalayas.
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Original:  Awards & Honors Honorable Prime Minister of Bangladesh Sheikh Hasina's National Honor  2012 Former PM and Opposition Party Leader of Bangladesh Khaleda Zia's Honor  2012 Noble Peace Prize Recipient Muhammad Yunus's Honor  2012  National Geographic Adventurer of the Year  2014  Pioneer Athlete,
Revised:  Awards & Honors Honorable Prime Minister of Bangladesh Sheikh Hasina's National Honor , 2012 Former PM and Opposition Party Leader of Bangladesh Khaleda Zia's Honor 2012 Noble Peace Prize Recipient Muhammad Yunus's Honor 2012 National Geographic Adventurer of the Year 2014 Pioneer Athlete,
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Original:  Awards & Honors Honorable Prime Minister of Bangladesh Sheikh Hasina's National Honor  2012 Former PM and Opposition Party Leader of Bangladesh Khaleda Zia's Honor  2012 Noble Peace Prize Recipient Muhammad Yunus's Honor  2012  National Geographic Adventurer of the Year  2014  Pioneer Athlete,
Revised:  Awards & Honors Honorable Prime Minister of Bangladesh Sheikh Hasina's National Honor 2012 Former PM and Opposition Party Leader of Bangladesh Khaleda Zia's Honor , 2012 Noble Peace Prize Recipient Muhammad Yunus's Honor 2012 National Geographic Adventurer of the Year 2014 Pioneer Athlete,
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Original:  Awards & Honors Honorable Prime Minister of Bangladesh Sheikh Hasina's National Honor  2012 Former PM and Opposition Party Leader of Bangladesh Khaleda Zia's Honor  2012 Noble Peace Prize Recipient Muhammad Yunus's Honor  2012  National Geographic Adventurer of the Year  2014  Pioneer Athlete,
Revised:  Awards & Honors Honorable Prime Minister of Bangladesh Sheikh Hasina's National Honor 2012 Former PM and Opposition Party Leader of Bangladesh Khaleda Zia's Honor 2012 Noble Peace Prize Recipient Muhammad Yunus's Honor , 2012 National Geographic Adventurer of the Year 2014 Pioneer Athlete,
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Original:  Awards & Honors Honorable Prime Minister of Bangladesh Sheikh Hasina's National Honor  2012 Former PM and Opposition Party Leader of Bangladesh Khaleda Zia's Honor  2012 Noble Peace Prize Recipient Muhammad Yunus's Honor  2012  National Geographic Adventurer of the Year  2014  Pioneer Athlete,
Revised:  Awards & Honors Honorable Prime Minister of Bangladesh Sheikh Hasina's National Honor 2012 Former PM and Opposition Party Leader of Bangladesh Khaleda Zia's Honor 2012 Noble Peace Prize Recipient Muhammad Yunus's Honor 2012 National Geographic Adventurer of the Year , 2014 Pioneer Athlete,
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Original:  Global Sports Mentoring Program, U.S. State Department and espnW  2014 Anannya Top Ten Awards  2015  Outstanding Young Alumna Award, Agnes Scott College, 2016  National Geographic Explorer  2016  Icon of Bangladesh by Dhaka Chamber of Commerce and Industry (DCCI) 2016  Young Global Leader  2019 (unaccepted)
Revised:  Global Sports Mentoring Program, U.S. State Department and espnW , 2014 Anannya Top Ten Awards 2015 Outstanding Young Alumna Award, Agnes Scott College, 2016 National Geographic Explorer 2016 Icon of Bangladesh by Dhaka Chamber of Commerce and Industry (DCCI) 2016 Young Global Leader 2019 (unaccepted)
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Original:  Global Sports Mentoring Program, U.S. State Department and espnW  2014 Anannya Top Ten Awards  2015  Outstanding Young Alumna Award, Agnes Scott College, 2016  National Geographic Explorer  2016  Icon of Bangladesh by Dhaka Chamber of Commerce and Industry (DCCI) 2016  Young Global Leader  2019 (unaccepted)
Revised:  Global Sports Mentoring Program, U.S. State Department and espnW 2014 Anannya Top Ten Awards , 2015 Outstanding Young Alumna Award, Agnes Scott College, 2016 National Geographic Explorer 2016 Icon of Bangladesh by Dhaka Chamber of Commerce and Industry (DCCI) 2016 Young Global Leader 2019 (unaccepted)
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Original:  Global Sports Mentoring Program, U.S. State Department and espnW  2014 Anannya Top Ten Awards  2015  Outstanding Young Alumna Award, Agnes Scott College, 2016  National Geographic Explorer  2016  Icon of Bangladesh by Dhaka Chamber of Commerce and Industry (DCCI) 2016  Young Global Leader  2019 (unaccepted)
Revised:  Global Sports Mentoring Program, U.S. State Department and espnW 2014 Anannya Top Ten Awards 2015 Outstanding Young Alumna Award, Agnes Scott College, 2016 National Geographic Explorer , 2016 Icon of Bangladesh by Dhaka Chamber of Commerce and Industry (DCCI) 2016 Young Global Leader 2019 (unaccepted)
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