wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  After the crew was massacred  the natives plundered the ship, provoking a response by warships of the United States Navy's African Slave Trade Patrol.
Revised:  After the crew was massacred , the natives plundered the ship, provoking a response by warships of the United States Navy's African Slave Trade Patrol.
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Original:  Captain Eben Farwell commanded the small schooner Mary Carver and he was at the port of Little Bereby to pick up a 600 pound load of camwood from a Bereby trader named Young Crack-O.
Revised:  Captain Eben Farwell commanded the small schooner Mary Carver and he was at the port of Little Bereby to pick up a 600-pound load of camwood from a Bereby trader named Young Crack-O.
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Original: The Mary Carver URL occurred in April 1842 when the American merchant ship Mary Carver was attacked by Bereby warriors in canoes near the kraal of Little Bereby Ivory Coast.
Revised: The Mary Carver Affair occurred in April 1842 when the American merchant ship Mary Carver was attacked by Bereby warriors in canoes near the kraal of Little Bereby Ivory Coast.
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Original:  Measurement There are various techniques to measure MVTR, ranging from gravimetric techniques that measure the gain or loss of moisture by mass, to highly sophisticated instrumental techniques that in some designs can measure extremely low transmission rates.
Revised: fucc Measurement There are various techniques to measure MVTR, ranging from gravimetric techniques that measure the gain or loss of moisture by mass, to highly sophisticated instrumental techniques that in some designs can measure extremely low transmission rates.
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Original:  Optoelectronic devices based on organic material, generally named OLEDs, need an encapsulation with low values of WVTR to guarantee  same performances over the device lifetime .
Revised:  Optoelectronic devices based on organic material, generally named OLEDs, need an encapsulation with low values of WVTR to guarantee the same performances over the device lifetime .
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Original:  Optoelectronic devices based on organic material, generally named OLEDs, need an encapsulation with low values of WVTR to guarantee  same performances over the device lifetime .
Revised:  Optoelectronic devices based on organic material, generally named OLEDs, need an encapsulation with low values of WVTR to guarantee same performances over the lifetime of the device .
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Original:  For example, the effect of temperature on the permeability can be as high as 10\% per degree centigrade , making it possible that MVTR results achieved at 23°C and 37°C can differ by a factor 4.
Revised:  For example, the effect of temperature on the permeability can be as high as 10\% per °C , making it possible that MVTR results achieved at 23°C and 37°C can differ by a factor 4.
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Original:  Father Enrique White was also detained and tortured, later exiled to England ref> Nancy Guzmán Jasme, "Un grito desde el silencio: detención, asesinato y desaparición de Bautista van Schouwen y Patricio Munita".
Revised:  Father Enrique White was also detained and tortured, later exiled to England . Nancy Guzmán Jasme, "Un grito desde el silencio: detención, asesinato y desaparición de Bautista van Schouwen y Patricio Munita".
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Original:  LOM Ediciones, Santiago, 1998, page 153- </ref> Van Schouwen and his lieutenant Patricio Munita had previously obtained clandestine refuge in the Capuchinos church-premises.
Revised:  LOM Ediciones, Santiago, 1998, page 153- Van Schouwen and his lieutenant Patricio Munita had previously obtained clandestine refuge in the Capuchinos church-premises.
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Original:  In October 1965 Bautista van Schouwen Vasey participated in the foundation of the MIR in Santiago and was elected at that opportunity member of MIR ’ s Central Committee.
Revised:  In October 1965 Bautista van Schouwen Vasey participated in the foundation of the MIR in Santiago and was elected at that opportunity member of MIR ' s Central Committee.
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Original:  Pages 1-121 Two years after was elected chairman of MIR ’ s Regional Committee for Concepción, the largest in the MIR, nationwide.
Revised:  Pages 1-121 Two years after was elected chairman of MIR ' s Regional Committee for Concepción, the largest in the MIR, nationwide.
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Original:  By then Bautista Van Schouwen had moved to Santiago and had taken the political leadership and the editor-in-chief post of El Rebelde, MIR ’ s official newspaper.
Revised:  By then Bautista Van Schouwen had moved to Santiago and had taken the political leadership and the editor-in-chief post of El Rebelde, MIR ' s official newspaper.
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Original:  Pages 1-121 Other authors of the epoch have placed Van Schouwen ’ s earlier ideological positions in the line of socialist humanism and also sympathetic with social-anarchist positions.
Revised:  Pages 1-121 Other authors of the epoch have placed Van Schouwen ' s earlier ideological positions in the line of socialist humanism and also sympathetic with social-anarchist positions.
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Original:  “ La vida de Miguel Enríquez y el MIR ” , in Naranjo Sandoval, Pedro (ed);
Revised:  " La vida de Miguel Enríquez y el MIR ” , in Naranjo Sandoval, Pedro (ed);
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Original:  “ La vida de Miguel Enríquez y el MIR ” , in Naranjo Sandoval, Pedro (ed);
Revised:  “ La vida de Miguel Enríquez y el MIR " , in Naranjo Sandoval, Pedro (ed);
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Original:  Ed. LOM. Santiago, 2004. p. 44 historians have established – based in interview testimonies of Marco Antonio Enríquez, a History Professor at Sorbonne ( also referred above as elder brother of Miguel Enríquez) - that Bautista Van Schouwen did not participate in the elaboration of the first historical document in the foundation of MIR, The “Insurrectional Thesis” .
Revised:  Ed. LOM. Santiago, 2004. p. 44 historians have established – based in interview testimonies of Marco Antonio Enríquez, a History Professor at Sorbonne ( also referred above as elder brother of Miguel Enríquez) - that Bautista Van Schouwen did not participate in the elaboration of the first historical document in the foundation of MIR, The "Insurrectional Thesis" .
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Original:  There was an autopsy performed, and the victim ’ s identities were also established, which was routinely reported thereafter to the police.
Revised:  There was an autopsy performed, and the victim ' s identities were also established, which was routinely reported thereafter to the police.
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Original:  The court hearing with full witness testimonies began on January 31st 2017 in Santiago.
Revised:  The court hearing with full witness testimonies began on January 31, 2017 in Santiago.
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Original: Ideological stands The ideological stands among the early generation of youngsters from Concepción that founded MIR in 1965 correspond to a variety of political ideologies ranging from Social-liberalism to Marxist and Trotskyite positions.
Revised: Ideological stance The ideological stance among the early generation of youngsters from Concepción that founded MIR in 1965 correspond to a variety of political ideologies ranging from Social-liberalism to Marxist and Trotskyite positions.
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Original: Demise  whereabouts Bautista Van Schouwen was killed under captivity by DINA late at night December 13, 1973 with a bullet on the head;
Revised: Demise and whereabouts Bautista Van Schouwen was killed under captivity by DINA late at night December 13, 1973 with a bullet on the head;
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Original: Demise  whereabouts Bautista Van Schouwen was killed under captivity by DINA late at night December 13, 1973 with a bullet on the head;
Revised: Demise whereabouts Bautista Van Schouwen was killed while in captivity by DINA late at night December 13, 1973 with a bullet on the head;
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Original: Demise  whereabouts Bautista Van Schouwen was killed under captivity by DINA late at night December 13, 1973 with a bullet on the head;
Revised: Demise whereabouts Bautista Van Schouwen was killed under captivity by DINA late on the night of December 13, 1973 with a bullet on the head;
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Original: Demise  whereabouts Bautista Van Schouwen was killed under captivity by DINA late at night December 13, 1973 with a bullet on the head;
Revised: Demise whereabouts Bautista Van Schouwen was killed under captivity by DINA late at night December 13, 1973 with a bullet to the head;
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Original:   later abandoned under a tree, at a cross-road in the proximities of Villa Grimaldi, and again his body perforated from the back with multiple bullets from machine-gun fire.
Revised:  his body was later abandoned under a tree, at a cross-road in the proximities of Villa Grimaldi, and again his body perforated from the back with multiple bullets from machine-gun fire.
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Original:   later abandoned under a tree, at a cross-road in the proximities of Villa Grimaldi, and again his body perforated from the back with multiple bullets from machine-gun fire.
Revised:  later abandoned under a tree, at a crossroads in the proximities of Villa Grimaldi, and again his body perforated from the back with multiple bullets from machine-gun fire.
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Original:   later abandoned under a tree, at a cross-road in the proximities of Villa Grimaldi, and again his body perforated from the back with multiple bullets from machine-gun fire.
Revised:  later abandoned under a tree, at a cross-road in the proximities of Villa Grimaldi, his body again perforated from the back with multiple bullets from machine-gun fire.
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Original:  Another military patrol discovered later the corpses of Munita and Van Schouwen (with no identifications) and – unaware of the above facts – took them routinely to the Forensic station in Santiago.
Revised:  Another military patrol discovered the corpses of Munita and Van Schouwen (with no identifications) and – unaware of the above facts – took them routinely to the Forensic station in Santiago.
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Original:  Another military patrol discovered later the corpses of Munita and Van Schouwen (with no identifications) and – unaware of the above facts – took them routinely to the Forensic station in Santiago.
Revised:  Another military patrol discovered later the corpses of Munita and Van Schouwen (with no identifications) and – unaware of the above facts – followed routine and took them to the forensic station in Santiago.
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Original:  There was an autopsy performed, and the victim' s identities were also established, which was routinely reported thereafter to the police.
Revised:  There was an autopsy performed, and the victims' identities were also established, which was routinely reported thereafter to the police.
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Original:  There was an autopsy performed, and the victim' s identities were also established, which was routinely reported thereafter to the police.
Revised:  There was an autopsy performed, and the victim' s identities were also established, which was reported thereafter to the police.
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Original:  When this report reached DINA  their operatives confiscated the corpses and ordered a secret burial, at night, in Patio 29 at the "Cementerio General" of Santiago.
Revised:  When this report reached DINA , their operatives confiscated the corpses and ordered a secret burial, at night, in Patio 29 at the "Cementerio General" of Santiago.
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Original:  MIR even published a picture of Van Schouwen depicting him with bandages  supposedly imprisoned in a military medical compound.
Revised:  MIR even published a picture of Van Schouwen depicting him with bandages , supposedly imprisoned in a military medical compound.
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Original:  On the other hand, the military have given contradictory information to the public;
Revised:  On the other hand, the military gave contradictory information to the public;
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Original:  his body was later abandoned under a tree, at a crossroads in the proximities of Villa Grimaldi, his body again perforated from the back with multiple bullets from a machinegun . Later on another military patrol discovered the corpses of Munita and Van Schouwen (with no identifications) and – unaware of the above facts – followed routine and took them to the forensic station in Santiago.
Revised:  his body was later abandoned under a tree, at a crossroads in the proximities of Villa Grimaldi, his body again perforated from the back with multiple bullets from a machine gun . Later on another military patrol discovered the corpses of Munita and Van Schouwen (with no identifications) and – unaware of the above facts – followed routine and took them to the forensic station in Santiago.
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Original: Social metabolism or socioeconomic metabolism is the set of flows of materials and energy that occur between Nature and society, between different societies, and within societies.
Revised: Social metabolism or socioeconomic metabolism is the set of flows of materials and energy that occur between nature and society, between different societies, and within societies.
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Original:  These can be transformed and circulated to be  consumed and excreted finally back to Nature itself.
Revised:  These can be transformed and circulated to be consumed and excreted finally back to nature itself.
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Original:  Each of these processes has a different environmental impact depending on how it is performed, the amount of materials and energy involved in the process, the area where it occurs, the time available or the Nature 's regenerative capacity.
Revised:  Each of these processes has a different environmental impact depending on how it is performed, the amount of materials and energy involved in the process, the area where it occurs, the time available or nature 's regenerative capacity.
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Original:  Social or socioeconomic metabolism stipulates that human society and its interaction with Nature form a complex self-reproducing system, and it can therefore be seen as paradigm for studying the biophysical basis of human societies under the aspect of self-reproduction.
Revised:  Social or socioeconomic metabolism stipulates that human society and its interaction with nature form a complex self-reproducing system, and it can therefore be seen as paradigm for studying the biophysical basis of human societies under the aspect of self-reproduction.
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Original: The Battle of Jahra took into effect as the result of the Battle of Hamdh.
Revised: The Battle of Jahra happened as the result of the Battle of Hamdh.
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Original: The Kuwait–Najd War erupted in the aftermath of World War I. The war occurred because Ibn Saud of Saudi Arabia wanted to annex Kuwait.
Revised: The Kuwait–Najd War erupted in the aftermath of World War I. The war occurred because Ibn Saud of Najd wanted to annex Kuwait.
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Original:  Outnumbered, the battle lasted for six days and resulted in heavy but unknown casualties on both sides resulting in the victory of the Ikhwan forces and leading to the battle of Jahra around the Kuwait Red Fort.
Revised:  The battle lasted for six days and resulted in heavy but unknown casualties on both sides resulting in the victory of the Ikhwan forces and leading to the battle of Jahra around the Kuwait Red Fort.
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Original:  The Ikhwan attack repulsed for the while, negotiations began between Salim and Al-Dawish ;
Revised:  The Ikhwan attack repulsed for the while, negotiations began between Salim and Al-Duwaish ;
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Original:  See also Kuwait Red Fort Unification of Saudi Arabia Ikhwan Faisal Al-Dwaish
Revised:  See also Kuwait Red Fort Unification of Saudi Arabia Ikhwan Faisal Al-Duwaish
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Original:  A force of three to four thousand Ikhwan, led by Faisal Al-Duwaish , attacked the Red Fort at Al-Jahra, defended by fifteen hundred men.
Revised:  A force of three to four thousand Ikhwan, led by Faisal al-Duwaish , attacked the Red Fort at Al-Jahra, defended by fifteen hundred men.
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Original:  The Ikhwan attack repulsed for the while, negotiations began between Salim and Al-Duwaish ;
Revised:  The Ikhwan attack repulsed for the while, negotiations began between Salim and al-Duwaish ;
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Original:  See also Kuwait Red Fort Unification of Saudi Arabia Ikhwan Faisal Al-Duwaish
Revised:  See also Kuwait Red Fort Unification of Saudi Arabia Ikhwan Faisal al-Duwaish
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Original:  In the south, the Toungoo Dynasty captured all those Shan States that would become known as Burmese Shan States in 1557.
Revised:  In the south, the Toungoo dynasty captured all those Shan States that would become known as Burmese Shan States in 1557.
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Original: Professional wrestling career File:King Curtis and Lou Albano - The Big Book of Wrestling - July 1972 (cropped).jpg|Iaukea with manager Lou Albano Iaukea came to Don Owen's Pacific Northwest territory, commonly known as Portland Wrestling in 1961, wrestling under the moniker Prince Kuhio.
Revised: Professional wrestling career Iaukea came to Don Owen's Pacific Northwest territory, commonly known as Portland Wrestling in 1961, wrestling under the moniker Prince Kuhio.
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Original: Curtis Piehau Iaukea III (September 15, 1937 – December 4, 2010) was a professional wrestler better known as King Curtis Iaukea.
Revised: Curtis Piehau Iaukea III (September 15, 1937 – December 4, 2010) was an American professional wrestler better known as King Curtis Iaukea.
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Original: Heroes of the Soviet Union Category:Recipients of the Order of Lenin Category:Recipients of the Order of the Patriotic War, 1st class Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Banner Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Star, twice Category:Recipients of the Order of Suvorov, 3rd class Category:Soviet  generals Category:Soviet military personnel of World War II Category:Soviet politicians Category:General Staff Academy (Soviet Union) alumni Category:Frunze Military Academy alum
Revised: Heroes of the Soviet Union Category:Recipients of the Order of Lenin Category:Recipients of the Order of the Patriotic War, 1st class Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Banner Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Star, twice Category:Recipients of the Order of Suvorov, 3rd class Category:Soviet major generals Category:Soviet military personnel of World War II Category:Soviet politicians Category:General Staff Academy (Soviet Union) alumni Category:Frunze Military Academy alum
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Original:  14 February 1909 - 10 May 1986) was a Soviet military leader of Bashkir origin.
Revised:  14 February 1909 – 10 May 1986) was a Soviet military leader of Bashkir origin.
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Original: Heroes of the Soviet Union Category:Recipients of the Order of Lenin Category:Recipients of the Order of the Patriotic War, 1st class Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Banner Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Star Category: Recipients of the Order of Suvorov, 3rd class Category: Soviet major generals Category:Soviet military personnel of World War II Category:Soviet politicians Category:General Staff Academy (Soviet Union) alumni Category:Frunze Military Academy alum
Revised: Heroes of the Soviet Union Category:Recipients of the Order of Lenin Category:Recipients of the Order of the Patriotic War, 1st class Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Banner Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Star Category: Soviet major generals Category:Soviet military personnel of World War II Category:Soviet politicians Category:General Staff Academy (Soviet Union) alumni Category:Frunze Military Academy alum
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Original:  It is currently under the office of the Vice-President and Ministry of State for National Heritage and Culture.
Revised:  It is currently under the office of the Vice-President and State Department for National Heritage and Culture.
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Original:  The collected artifacts were acquired by the government of Kenya after a concessionary arrangement was agreed upon with Joseph Murumbi, who had initially turned down several huge offers to buy his collections by overseas bidders. operation The archives operates from 8 am to 5 pm. it offers free exhibition to the public for a period of one week during special occasions </ref>
Revised:  The collected artifacts were acquired by the government of Kenya after a concessionary arrangement was agreed upon with Joseph Murumbi, who had initially turned down several huge offers to buy his collections by overseas bidders. operation Opening hours Monday 8 am to 5 pm. it offers free exhibition to the public for a period of one week during special occasions </ref>
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Original:  The collected artifacts were acquired by the government of Kenya after a concessionary arrangement was agreed upon with Joseph Murumbi, who had initially turned down several huge offers to buy his collections by overseas bidders. operation The archives operates from 8 am to 5 pm. it offers free exhibition to the public for a period of one week during special occasions </ref>
Revised:  The collected artifacts were acquired by the government of Kenya after a concessionary arrangement was agreed upon with Joseph Murumbi, who had initially turned down several huge offers to buy his collections by overseas bidders. operation The archives operates from 8 :00 AM – 5 pm. it offers free exhibition to the public for a period of one week during special occasions </ref>
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Original:  The collected artifacts were acquired by the government of Kenya after a concessionary arrangement was agreed upon with Joseph Murumbi, who had initially turned down several huge offers to buy his collections by overseas bidders. operation The archives operates from 8 am to 5 pm. it offers free exhibition to the public for a period of one week during special occasions </ref>
Revised:  The collected artifacts were acquired by the government of Kenya after a concessionary arrangement was agreed upon with Joseph Murumbi, who had initially turned down several huge offers to buy his collections by overseas bidders. operation The archives operates from 8 am to 5 pm. it offers free exhibition to the public for a period of one week during special occasions 
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Original:  Another notable example is "Eleven O'Clock," the second to last song in the show Crazy Ex-Girlfriend, which takes the idea of an 11 o'clock number to the next level.
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Original:  “No Good Deed” from from Wicked, "Gimme Gimme" from Thoroughly Modern Millie, "Another National Anthem" from Assassins, "The American Dream" from Miss Saigon, "I'm Here" from The Color Purple, and "Always Starting Over" from If/Then.
Revised:  “No Good Deed” from Wicked, "Gimme Gimme" from Thoroughly Modern Millie, "Another National Anthem" from Assassins, "The American Dream" from Miss Saigon, "I'm Here" from The Color Purple, and "Always Starting Over" from If/Then.
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Original: Hisham Mohammed Osman Bastawisy  is an Egyptian judge and the vice president of the Egyptian Court of Cassation.
Revised: Hisham Mohammed Osman Bastawisy () is an Egyptian judge and the vice president of the Egyptian Court of Cassation.
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Original:  He is running for the Egyptian presidential election, 2012  as a Tagammu nominee.
Revised:  He ran for the office of president during the 2012 as a Tagammu nominee.
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Original: Hisham Mohammed Osman Bastawisy () is an Egyptian judge and the vice president of the Egyptian Court of Cassation.
Revised: Hisham Mohammed Osman Bastawisy () was an Egyptian judge and the vice president of the Egyptian Court of Cassation.
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