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Original:  Rescue efforts have began by the government and the Red Cross, especially in the rural and heavily flooded areas.
Revised:  Rescue efforts have began by the government and the Red Cross, have begun especially in rural and heavily-flooded areas.
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Original:  Vetaia Dokonivalu, a local resident from Ba, a hard-hit town, said "It was really frightening.
Revised:  Vetaia Dokonivalu, a local resident from Ba, a hard-hit town, commented, "It was really frightening.
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Original:  Isimeli Tukana, a health official, said  "People need to collect as much rainwater as possible and drink as much of this as possible.
Revised:  Isimeli Tukana, a health official, said , "People need to collect as much rainwater as possible and drink as much of this as possible.
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Original:  Camberra finished third and travaled to EnergyAustralia Stadium in New South Wales to play the Newcatsle Jets.
Revised:  Camberra finished third and travaled to EnergyAustralia Stadium in New South Wales to play the Newcastle Jets.
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Original:   "It was a really pleasing performance," said Roar coach Jeff Hopkins.
Revised:  In a desperate attempt to get back in the game, Camberra played three players at the back after half time. This strategy worked well in the opening stages of the second half, but failed to result in any goals for United. Camberra were denied a goal early in the half after substitute Ashleigh Sykes was ruled offside. "It was a really pleasing performance," said Roar coach Jeff Hopkins.
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Original:  "It was definitely a tight clash, Canberra came to play and it was a hard match 
Revised:  "It was definitely a tight clash, Canberra came to play and it was a hard match .
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Original: The Queensland Roar have defeated Camberra United 2-0 in the W-League Grand Final at Ballymore Stadium in Brisbane.
Revised: The Queensland Roar have defeated Canberra United 2-0 in the W-League Grand Final at Ballymore Stadium in Brisbane.
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Original:  Camberra finished third and travaled to EnergyAustralia Stadium in New South Wales to play the Newcastle Jets.
Revised:  Canberra finished third and travaled to EnergyAustralia Stadium in New South Wales to play the Newcastle Jets.
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Original:  Camberra finished third and travaled to EnergyAustralia Stadium in New South Wales to play the Newcastle Jets.
Revised:  Camberra finished third and traveled to EnergyAustralia Stadium in New South Wales to play the Newcastle Jets.
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Original:  In a desperate attempt to get back in the game, Camberra played three players at the back after half time.
Revised:  In a desperate attempt to get back in the game, Canberra played three players at the back after half time.
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Original:  Camberra were denied a goal early in the half after substitute Ashleigh Sykes was ruled offside.
Revised:  Canberra were denied a goal early in the half after substitute Ashleigh Sykes was ruled offside.
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Original:  "It's just a dream, especially because it's the inaugural year, just to be in the right spot at the right time and finish it off was really good," Harch, who claimed player of the match honours, told ABC1 . "It was definitely a tight clash, Canberra came to play and it was a hard match.
Revised:  "It's just a dream, especially because it's the inaugural year, just to be in the right spot at the right time and finish it off was really good," Harch, who claimed player of the match honours, told ABC1 , "It was definitely a tight clash, Canberra came to play and it was a hard match.
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Original:  The W-League is Australia's premier womans football competition.
Revised:  The W-League is Australia's premier women's football competition.
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Original:  Midefielder Tameka Butt doubled the advantage 17 minutes later.
Revised:  Midfielder Tameka Butt doubled the advantage 17 minutes later.
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Original: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five armed youths entering his apartment and holding him prisoner while they stole his belongings.
Revised: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five armed youths entering his apartment and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings.
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Original: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five armed youths wearing balaclavas  entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings .
Revised: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five youths wearing balaclavas entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings .
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Original: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five armed youths wearing balaclavas  entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings .
Revised: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five armed youths wearing balaclavas entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings 
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Original: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five youths wearing balaclavas and carrying firearms  entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings  The Emergency Task Force was dispatched to East Toronto , and the teenagers were arrested gathered together in a single house along with the stolen plasma-screen television, a video game system and jewelry.
Revised: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year-old who reported that five youths wearing balaclavas and carrying firearms entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings The Emergency Task Force was dispatched to East Toronto , and the teenagers were arrested gathered together in a single house along with the stolen plasma-screen television, a video game system and jewelry.
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Original: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five youths wearing balaclavas and carrying firearms  entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings  The Emergency Task Force was dispatched to East Toronto , and the teenagers were arrested gathered together in a single house along with the stolen plasma-screen television, a video game system and jewelry.
Revised: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five youths wearing balaclavas and carrying firearms had entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings The Emergency Task Force was dispatched to East Toronto , and the teenagers were arrested gathered together in a single house along with the stolen plasma-screen television, a video game system and jewelry.
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Original: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five youths wearing balaclavas and carrying firearms  entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings  The Emergency Task Force was dispatched to East Toronto , and the teenagers were arrested gathered together in a single house along with the stolen plasma-screen television, a video game system and jewelry.
Revised: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five youths wearing balaclavas and carrying firearms entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings . The Emergency Task Force was dispatched to East Toronto , and the teenagers were arrested gathered together in a single house along with the stolen plasma-screen television, a video game system and jewelry.
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Original: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five youths wearing balaclavas and carrying firearms  entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings  The Emergency Task Force was dispatched to East Toronto , and the teenagers were arrested gathered together in a single house along with the stolen plasma-screen television, a video game system and jewelry.
Revised: ]] Toronto police responded to an emergency call from a 24-year old who reported five youths wearing balaclavas and carrying firearms entered his apartment around 01:30 in the morning, and held him prisoner while they stole his belongings The Emergency Task Force was dispatched to East Toronto where they arrested the teenagers who were all together in a single house along with the stolen plasma-screen television, a video game system and jewelry.
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Original:  Two of the youths, 18-year old Joshua Lourie and another who cannot be named under the Youth Criminal Justice Act, had prior arrests and were charged with failing to abide by the terms of their release
Revised:  Two of the youths, 18-year-old Joshua Lourie and another who cannot be named under the Youth Criminal Justice Act, had prior arrests and were charged with failing to abide by the terms of their release
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Original:  Two of the youths, 18-year old Joshua Lourie and another who cannot be named under the Youth Criminal Justice Act, had prior arrests and were charged with failing to abide by the terms of their release
Revised:  Two of the youths, 18-year old Joshua Lourie and another who cannot be named under the Youth Criminal Justice Act, had prior arrests and were charged with failing to abide by the terms of their releases
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Original:   The war entered its 17 day and as of 7:31 a.m. (EET) in Gaza, bombs could still be heard going off around the Strip.
Revised:  left The war entered its 17 day and as of 7:31 a.m. (EET) in Gaza, bombs could still be heard going off around the Strip.
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Original: Heavy battling continued overnight on the Gaza Strip as Israeli warplanes and helicopters bombed targets and Israeli Defense Forces fought with Hamas militants in Palestine.
Revised: Heavy fighting continued overnight on the Gaza Strip as Israeli warplanes and helicopters bombed targets and Israeli Defense Forces fought with Hamas militants in Palestine.
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Original: Heavy fighting continued overnight on the Gaza Strip as Israeli warplanes and helicopters bombed targets and Israeli Defense Forces fought with Hamas militants in Palestine.
Revised: Heavy fighting continued overnight in the Gaza Strip as Israeli warplanes and helicopters bombed targets and Israeli Defense Forces fought with Hamas militants in Palestine.
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Original:  The counsel passed a resolution which condemned the Israeli operation and occupation of Gaza calling it a "massive violations of human rights.
Revised:  The council passed a resolution which condemned the Israeli operation and occupation of Gaza calling it a "massive violations of human rights.
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Original: File:Ahmad Tibi.jpg|Ahmed Tibi has been a legislator in Israel's Knesset since 1999 Israel's Central Election Committee voted yesterday to disqualify two Arab politcal parties from running in the country's general elections scheduled for February 10th.
Revised:  Israel's Knesset since 1999 Israel's Central Election Committee voted yesterday to disqualify two Arab politcal parties from running in the country's general elections scheduled for February 10th.
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Original: File:Ahmad Tibi.jpg|Ahmed Tibi has been a legislator in Israel's Knesset since 1999 Israel's Central Election Committee voted yesterday to disqualify two Arab politcal parties from running in the country's general elections scheduled for February 10th.
Revised: File:Ahmad Tibi.jpg|Ahmed Tibi has been a legislator in Israel's Israel's Central Election Committee voted yesterday to disqualify two Arab politcal parties from running in the country's general elections scheduled for February 10th.
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Original: File:Ahmad Tibi.jpg|Ahmed Tibi has been a legislator in Israel's Knesset since 1999 Israel's Central Election Committee voted yesterday to disqualify two Arab politcal parties from running in the country's general elections scheduled for February 10th.
Revised: File:Ahmad Tibi.jpg|Ahmed Tibi has been a legislator in Israel's Knesset since 1999 Central Election Committee voted yesterday to disqualify two Arab politcal parties from running in the country's general elections scheduled for February 10th.
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Original: File:WTM sheila 0036.jpg|United States District Court for the Southern District of New York (file photo) A federal court in New York, New York ruled Monday that American financier Bernard Madoff can remain free on a US$10 million bond.
Revised:  A federal court in New York, New York ruled Monday that American financier Bernard Madoff can remain free on a US$10 million bond.
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Original:  File:WTM sheila 0036.jpg|United States District Court for the Southern District of New York (file photo) Federal prosecutors had argued that Madoff had violated terms of his bail by mailing valuables to relatives from his Manhattan apartment, where he is under house arrest.
Revised:  (file photo) Federal prosecutors had argued that Madoff had violated terms of his bail by mailing valuables to relatives from his Manhattan apartment, where he is under house arrest.
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Original:  We will support him until we hear otherwise."  
Revised:  We will support him until we hear otherwise." . 
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Original:  He is charged with forcefully kissing her after she turned down an offer from him of chicken for sex.
Revised:  He is charged with forcibly kissing her after she turned down an offer from him of chicken for sex.
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Original:  Members of the Sud Rail labour union  voted to return to work on Tuesday , and the station re-opened at 7 pm in the evening .
Revised:  Members of the Sud Rail labour union voted to return to work , and the station re-opened at 7 pm in the evening .
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Original: Hillary Clinton confirmation hearing in US Senate Official portrait of Hillary Clinton.
Revised:  Official portrait of Hillary Clinton.
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Original: On Tuesday, Hillary Clinton began her confirmation hearing for her position as the new United States Secretary of State when Barack Obama ascends to the US Presidency.
Revised: On Tuesday, Hillary Clinton began her confirmation hearings for her position as the new United States Secretary of State when Barack Obama ascends to the US Presidency.
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Original:  It required that Bill Clinton  disclose the foundation's future contributors once a year
Revised:  It stipulated that Bill Clinton disclose the foundation's future contributors once a year
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Original:  It required that Bill Clinton  disclose the foundation's future contributors once a year
Revised:  It required that Bill Clinton must disclose the foundation's future contributors once a year
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Original:  It stipulated that Bill Clinton must disclose the foundation's future contributors once a year  
Revised:  It stipulated that Bill Clinton must disclose the foundation's future contributors once a year . 
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Original:  Prior to Hillary Clinton's nomination, the Obama transistion team required a memorandum of understanding between transition officials and Bill Clinton's foundation, which was signed on December 12.
Revised: "I share the President-elect's view that the activities of the Clinton Foundation and President Clinton himself should not be a barrier to Senator Clinton’s service," Senator Lugar further said. "But I also share the view implicitly recognized by the memorandum of understanding that the work of the Clinton Foundation is a unique complication that will have to be managed with great care and transparency." Prior to Hillary Clinton's nomination, the Obama transistion team required a memorandum of understanding between transition officials and Bill Clinton's foundation, which was signed on December 12.
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Original:  During the hearing by the Senate Committee on Foreign Relations, she was questioned about her husband 's , former President Bill Clinton  , charitable foundation, which has come under fire for accepting donations in the tens of millions of dollars from a number of foreign governments, foundations and individuals.
Revised:  During the hearing by the Senate Committee on Foreign Relations, she was questioned about her husband , former President Bill Clinton , charitable foundation, which has come under fire for accepting donations in the tens of millions of dollars from a number of foreign governments, foundations and individuals.
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Original:  During the hearing by the Senate Committee on Foreign Relations, she was questioned about her husband 's , former President Bill Clinton  , charitable foundation, which has come under fire for accepting donations in the tens of millions of dollars from a number of foreign governments, foundations and individuals.
Revised:  During the hearing by the Senate Committee on Foreign Relations, she was questioned about her husband 's , former President Bill Clinton 's , charitable foundation, which has come under fire for accepting donations in the tens of millions of dollars from a number of foreign governments, foundations and individuals.
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Original:  The prepared journey  includes the route through Mauritania, Atlas Mountains in Morocco and into Mali.
Revised:  The prepared journey also includes the route through Mauritania, Atlas Mountains in Morocco and into Mali.
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Original:  It will  cross the harsh environment of Sahara’s remote “Rub' al Khali (empty quarter),” for up to two weeks amid real fears of terrorist attacks.
Revised:  It will further cross the harsh environment of Sahara’s remote “Rub' al Khali (empty quarter),” for up to two weeks amid real fears of terrorist attacks.
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Original:  File:Mali-locator.png|Locator Map of Timbuktu city in Tombouctou Region, in the West African nation of Mali.
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Original:  It runs on bioethanol and is powered by a modified 140bhp Yamaha R1 superbike engine with a lightweight automatic CVT ( continuously variable transmission ) gear-box from a snowmobile . Costing £35,000, the flying car's range is 180 miles (flight) / 250 miles (road) with cruising altitude of 2,000-3,000ft and maximum of 15,000ft.
Revised:  It runs on bioethanol and is powered by a modified 140bhp Yamaha R1 superbike engine with a lightweight automatic continuously variable transmission ) gear-box from a snowmobile . Costing £35,000, the flying car's range is 180 miles (flight) / 250 miles (road) with cruising altitude of 2,000-3,000ft and maximum of 15,000ft.
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Original:  It runs on bioethanol and is powered by a modified 140bhp Yamaha R1 superbike engine with a lightweight automatic CVT ( continuously variable transmission ) gear-box from a snowmobile . Costing £35,000, the flying car's range is 180 miles (flight) / 250 miles (road) with cruising altitude of 2,000-3,000ft and maximum of 15,000ft.
Revised:  It runs on bioethanol and is powered by a modified 140bhp Yamaha R1 superbike engine with a lightweight automatic CVT ( continuously variable transmission from a snowmobile . Costing £35,000, the flying car's range is 180 miles (flight) / 250 miles (road) with cruising altitude of 2,000-3,000ft and maximum of 15,000ft.
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Original: The   Parajet Skycar is a prototype flying car.
Revised: The expedition will not have an easy task, especially since the Skycar will be tested to the limits amid punishing operating environments and weather conditions. "Clearly the reliability of the car is crucial," said Mr Laughton. "We're going to have to cope with wind chill temperatures as low as -30 deg C and blistering heat of up to 50 deg C. But it's been fully tested at a secret location and it 100 per cent works," he added. Parajet Skycar is a prototype flying car.
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Original: The   Parajet Skycar is a prototype flying car.
Revised: The The Parajet Skycar is a prototype flying car.
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Original:  It will further cross the harsh environment of Sahara’s remote “Rub' al Khali  (empty quarter), ” for up to two weeks amid real fears of terrorist attacks.
Revised:  It will further cross the harsh environment of Sahara’s remote “Rub' al Khali " (empty quarter), ” for up to two weeks amid real fears of terrorist attacks.
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Original:  It will further cross the harsh environment of Sahara’s remote “Rub' al Khali  (empty quarter), ” for up to two weeks amid real fears of terrorist attacks.
Revised:  It will further cross the harsh environment of Sahara’s remote “Rub' al Khali (empty quarter), for up to two weeks amid real fears of terrorist attacks.
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Original:  File:Rub'_al_Khali_(Arabian_Empty_Quarter)_sand_dunes_imaged_by_Terra_(EOS_AM-1).jpg|Satellite image of sand dunes in Rub' al Khali, Arabia's "empty quarter".
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Original: McGoohan leaves a widow, Joan Drummond McGoohan, 3 Daughters, 5 grandchildren (Sarah, Erin, Simon, Nina, and Paddy) and 1 great-grandchild, Jack Lockhart, born 11 June 2008.
Revised: McGoohan leaves a widow, Joan Drummond McGoohan, 3 Daughters, 5 grandchildren (Sarah, Erin, Simon, Nina, and Paddy) and 1 great-grandchild, Jack Lockhart, born 11 June 
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Original:  Additional information from the article Patrick McGoohan at UR
Revised:  2008
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Original:  Having been born in New York and raised in the UK and Ireland, the actor appeared in many other series and films , notably the ITV network series "Armchair Theatre", Danger Man and was also considered at one point for the role of James Bond.
Revised:  Having been born in New York and raised in the UK and Ireland, the actor played in numerous series on both continents , notably the ITV network series "Armchair Theatre", Danger Man and was also considered at one point for the role of James Bond.
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Original:  McGoohan leaves a widow, Joan Drummond McGoohan, 3 Daughters, 5 grandchildren (Sarah, Erin, Simon, Nina, and Paddy) and 1 great-grandchild, Jack Lockhart , born 11 June 2008
Revised:  McGoohan leaves a widow, Joan Drummond McGoohan, 3 Daughters, 5 grandchildren (Sarah, Erin, Simon, Nina, and Paddy) and 1 great-grandchild, Jack Lockhart 
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Original: Having been born in New York  and raised in the UK and Ireland, the actor played in numerous series on both continents, notably the ITV network series "Armchair Theatre", Danger Man and was also considered at one point for the role of James Bond.
Revised: Born in New York and raised in the UK and Ireland, the actor played in numerous series on both continents, notably the ITV network series "Armchair Theatre", Danger Man and was also considered at one point for the role of James Bond.
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Original: Having been born in New York  and raised in the UK and Ireland, the actor played in numerous series on both continents, notably the ITV network series "Armchair Theatre", Danger Man and was also considered at one point for the role of James Bond.
Revised: Having been born in New York , and raised in the UK and Ireland, the actor played in numerous series on both continents, notably the ITV network series "Armchair Theatre", Danger Man and was also considered at one point for the role of James Bond.
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