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Original: Extensive research has been done into the stygofauna of numerous other European countries (namely France and Slovenia) , the US and more recently in Australia, due to easy accessibility of caves and wells in these regions, as well as the high diversity and numbers of animals present here . Many species of stygofauna, especially the obligate stygobites, are endemic to particular regions or even particular caves.
Revised: Extensive research has been done into the stygofauna of numerous other European countries (namely France and Slovenia) , the US and more recently in Australia, due to easy accessibility of caves and wells in these regions, as well as the high diversity and numbers of animals present here . Many species of stygofauna, particularly obligate stygobites, are endemic to particular regions or even particular caves.
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Original: Extensive research has been done into the stygofauna of numerous other European countries (namely France and Slovenia) , the US and more recently in Australia, due to easy accessibility of caves and wells in these regions, as well as the high diversity and numbers of animals present here . Many species of stygofauna, especially the obligate stygobites, are endemic to particular regions or even particular caves.
Revised: Extensive research has been done into the stygofauna of numerous other European countries (namely France and Slovenia) , the US and more recently in Australia, due to easy accessibility of caves and wells in these regions, as well as the high diversity and numbers of animals present here . Many species of stygofauna, especially the obligate stygobites, are endemic to specific regions or even particular caves.
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Original: Extensive research has been done into the stygofauna of numerous other European countries (namely France and Slovenia) , the US and more recently in Australia, due to easy accessibility of caves and wells in these regions, as well as the high diversity and numbers of animals present here . Many species of stygofauna, especially the obligate stygobites, are endemic to particular regions or even particular caves.
Revised: Extensive research has been done into the stygofauna of numerous other European countries (namely France and Slovenia) , the US and more recently in Australia, due to easy accessibility of caves and wells in these regions, as well as the high diversity and numbers of animals present here . Many species of stygofauna, especially the obligate stygobites, are endemic to particular regions or even individual caves.
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Original:  This makes them focal points for conservation of groundwater systems.
Revised:  This makes them an important focus for the conservation of groundwater systems.
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Original:  Precise historical records are not available for the Sunga phase which is roughly between the 1st century BC and 73 BC.
Revised:  Precise historical records are not available for the Shunga phase which is roughly between the 1st century BC and 73 BC.
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Original:  Third period This is the post-Mauryan age covering the Sunga and Kushana periods.
Revised:  Third period This is the post-Mauryan age covering the Shunga and Kushana periods.
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Original:  Of the periods the remnants of big and well-protected brick-built structures, the brick-strewn floors, pillar-pits, the terracotta plaques of the Sunga period, the semi-precious stones and beads, the temples' pinnacles and other such artifacts are reported to have been noticed.
Revised:  Of the periods the remnants of big and well-protected brick-built structures, the brick-strewn floors, pillar-pits, the terracotta plaques of the Shunga period, the semi-precious stones and beads, the temples' pinnacles and other such artifacts are reported to have been noticed.
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Original:  This is confirmed by archaeological materials such as cast copper coins of Mauryan type still in use in the 1st and 2nd centuries AD, numerous terracotta plaques of Sunga style, and a large variety of Black Polished Ware.
Revised:  This is confirmed by archaeological materials such as cast copper coins of Mauryan type still in use in the 1st and 2nd centuries AD, numerous terracotta plaques of Shunga style, and a large variety of Black Polished Ware.
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Original:  The land in the region is almost 36 m above sea level, whereas Dhaka, the capital of Bangladesh, is around 6 m above sea URL geography, para.3 .
Revised:  The land in the region is almost 36 m above sea level, whereas Dhaka, the capital of Bangladesh, is around 6 m above sea level .
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Original:  It was a vibrant administrative, religious and cultural center from the 3rd century BC to the 12th century AD that is from the Maurya Empire time to the Sena dynasty period.
Revised:  It was a vibrant administrative, religious and cultural centre from the 3rd century BC to the 12th century AD that is from the Maurya Empire time to the Sena dynasty period.
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Original:  City walls, elaborate gates, palaces, common dwellings, assembly halls, temples, viharas, shops, ponds and even suburban temples and viharas characterized the city;
Revised:  City walls, elaborate gates, palaces, common dwellings, assembly halls, temples, viharas, shops, ponds and even suburban temples and viharas characterised the city;
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Original:  Ashraf, Kazi Khaleed;, Pundranagar to Sherebanglanagar : architecture in Bangladesh, 1997, pp. 11. Etymology There are several theories regarding the word ‘Pundra’ . According to one theory the word ‘Pundra’ owes its origin to a disease called ‘Pandu’ .
Revised:  Ashraf, Kazi Khaleed;, Pundranagar to Sherebanglanagar : architecture in Bangladesh, 1997, pp. 11. Etymology There are several theories regarding the word 'Pundra' . According to one theory the word ‘Pundra’ owes its origin to a disease called ‘Pandu’ .
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Original:  Ashraf, Kazi Khaleed;, Pundranagar to Sherebanglanagar : architecture in Bangladesh, 1997, pp. 11. Etymology There are several theories regarding the word ‘Pundra’ . According to one theory the word ‘Pundra’ owes its origin to a disease called ‘Pandu’ .
Revised:  Ashraf, Kazi Khaleed;, Pundranagar to Sherebanglanagar : architecture in Bangladesh, 1997, pp. 11. Etymology There are several theories regarding the word ‘Pundra’ . According to one theory the word 'Pundra' owes its origin to a disease called ‘Pandu’ .
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Original:  Ashraf, Kazi Khaleed;, Pundranagar to Sherebanglanagar : architecture in Bangladesh, 1997, pp. 11. Etymology There are several theories regarding the word ‘Pundra’ . According to one theory the word ‘Pundra’ owes its origin to a disease called ‘Pandu’ .
Revised:  Ashraf, Kazi Khaleed;, Pundranagar to Sherebanglanagar : architecture in Bangladesh, 1997, pp. 11. Etymology There are several theories regarding the word ‘Pundra’ . According to one theory the word ‘Pundra’ owes its origin to a disease called 'Pandu' .
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Original:  Mahasthan or Pundranagar was an important location on a major north south navigation as can be seen in James Rennell ’ s map of Bengal drawn in 1767.
Revised:  Mahasthan or Pundranagar was an important location on a major north south navigation as can be seen in James Rennell ' s map of Bengal drawn in 1767.
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Original:  All these references conclusively establish Pundranagar ’ s close association with the Mauryan rule.
Revised:  All these references conclusively establish Pundranagar ' s close association with the Mauryan rule.
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Original:  Of the periods the remnants of big and well-protected brick-built structures, the brick-strewn floors, pillar-pits, the terracotta plaques of the Shunga period, the semi-precious stones and beads, the temples' pinnacles and other such artifacts are reported to have been noticed.
Revised:  Of the periods the remnants of big and well-protected brick-built structures, the brick-strewn floors, pillar-pits, the terracotta plaques of the Shunga period, the semi-precious stones and beads, the temples' pinnacles and other such artefacts are reported to have been noticed.
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Original: Banglapedia, pp. 348-349.
Revised: Banglapedia, pp. 348–349.
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Original: Khan, Enayetullah, Bangladesh, splendours of the past, pp. 61-62.
Revised: Khan, Enayetullah, Bangladesh, splendours of the past, pp. 61–62.
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Original:  PUNDRANAGARA : AN EMPORIUM OF NORTH BENGAL Mahasthan - Glory to be Treasured
Revised:  PUNDRANAGARA : AN EMPORIUM OF NORTH BENGAL Mahasthan – Glory to be Treasured
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Original:  However, behind what Cunningham considered a 'waste of time and money' lay the glorious heritage of a nation which needed to be discovered.
Revised:  However, behind what Cunningham considered a 'waste of time and money' lay the glorious heritage of a nation that needed to be discovered.
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Original:  However, he was forced to retire early from football during the 2000–01 season due to chronic fatigue syndrome.
Revised:  However, he retired early from football during the 2000–01 season due to chronic fatigue syndrome.
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Original: Ardiles was finally sacked on 5 February 1992 and replaced by Kevin Keegan, who chose David Kelly and Micky Quinn as his first choice attacking force.
Revised: Ardiles was sacked on 5 February 1992 and replaced by Kevin Keegan, who chose David Kelly and Micky Quinn as his first choice attacking force.
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Original:  Hunt returned to Charlton briefly in 2003 to try to earn another contract, and played in three reserve games, but was not offered a contract and his anticipated return to professional football never happened .
Revised:  Hunt returned to Charlton briefly in 2003 to try to earn another contract, and played in three reserve games, but was not offered a contract .
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Original:  In  1998,  he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League , on a free transfer . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
Revised:  In In the summer of 1998, he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League , on a free transfer . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
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Original:  In  1998,  he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League , on a free transfer . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
Revised:  In 1998, he joined Charlton Athletic on a free transfer just after they won promotion to the Premier League , on a free transfer . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
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Original:  In  1998,  he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League , on a free transfer . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
Revised:  In 1998, he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
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Original:  In  1998,  he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League , on a free transfer . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
Revised:  In 1998, he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League , on a free transfer . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored 24 league goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
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Original:  In  1998,  he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League , on a free transfer . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
Revised:  In 1998, he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League , on a free transfer . Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won the Division One title to win promotion back to the Premiership.
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Original:  Hunt returned to Charlton briefly in 2003 to try to earn another contract, and played in three reserve games, but was not offered a contract  .
Revised:  Hunt returned to Charlton briefly in 2003 to try to earn another contract, and played in three reserve games, but was not offered a contract and never played professional football again .
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Original: Ardiles was sacked on 5 February 1992 and replaced by Kevin Keegan, who initially chose David Kelly and Micky Quinn as his two regular strikers . Hunt was on the sidelines for much of the next 12 months , with Quinn departing to Coventry City in November 1992 and Gavin Peacock playing alongside David Kelly for most of the club's games until Andy Cole was signed in March 1993.
Revised: Ardiles was sacked on 5 February 1992 and replaced by Kevin Keegan, who chose David Kelly and Micky Quinn as his two regular strikers . Hunt was on the sidelines for much of the next 12 months , with Quinn departing to Coventry City in November 1992 and Gavin Peacock playing alongside David Kelly for most of the club's games until Andy Cole was signed in March 1993.
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Original: Ardiles was sacked on 5 February 1992 and replaced by Kevin Keegan, who initially chose David Kelly and Micky Quinn as his two regular strikers . Hunt was on the sidelines for much of the next 12 months , with Quinn departing to Coventry City in November 1992 and Gavin Peacock playing alongside David Kelly for most of the club's games until Andy Cole was signed in March 1993.
Revised: Ardiles was sacked on 5 February 1992 and replaced by Kevin Keegan, who initially chose David Kelly and Micky Quinn as his first choice attacking force . Hunt was on the sidelines for much of the next 12 months , with Quinn departing to Coventry City in November 1992 and Gavin Peacock playing alongside David Kelly for most of the club's games until Andy Cole was signed in March 1993.
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Original: Ardiles was sacked on 5 February 1992 and replaced by Kevin Keegan, who initially chose David Kelly and Micky Quinn as his two regular strikers . Hunt was on the sidelines for much of the next 12 months , with Quinn departing to Coventry City in November 1992 and Gavin Peacock playing alongside David Kelly for most of the club's games until Andy Cole was signed in March 1993.
Revised: Ardiles was sacked on 5 February 1992 and replaced by Kevin Keegan, who initially chose David Kelly and Micky Quinn as his two regular strikers . Hunt was on the sidelines for much of the next 12 months 
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Original:  Having failed to feature in Newcastle's 1992-93 Division One campaign, Ardiles signed Hunt for his new club West Bromwich Albion in a £100, 000 deal on transfer deadline day 1993.
Revised:  before departing to West Bromwich Albion in a £100, 000 deal on transfer deadline day 1993.
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Original:  In the summer of 1998, his Albion contract expired and he joined Charlton Athletic on a free transfer just after they won promotion to the Premier League  .
Revised:  . In 1998, his Albion contract expired and he joined Charlton Athletic on a free transfer just after they won promotion to the Premier League .
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Original:  In the summer of 1998, his Albion contract expired and he joined Charlton Athletic on a free transfer just after they won promotion to the Premier League  .
Revised:  In the summer of 1998, he joined Charlton Athletic on a free transfer just after they won promotion to the Premier League .
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Original:  In the summer of 1998, his Albion contract expired and he joined Charlton Athletic on a free transfer just after they won promotion to the Premier League  .
Revised:  In the summer of 1998, his Albion contract expired and he joined Charlton Athletic , who had just been promoted to the Premier League .
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Original:  In the summer of 1998, his Albion contract expired and he joined Charlton Athletic on a free transfer just after they won promotion to the Premier League  .
Revised:  In the summer of 1998, his Albion contract expired and he joined Charlton Athletic on a free transfer just after they won promotion to the Premier League , on a free transfer .
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Original:  Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season at the club, with him scoring seven league goals , but in his second season Hunt scored 24 league goals as Charlton won the Division One title to win promotion back to the Premiership.
Revised:  Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season with them , but in his second season Hunt scored 24 league goals as Charlton won the Division One title to win promotion back to the Premiership.
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Original:  Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season at the club, with him scoring seven league goals , but in his second season Hunt scored 24 league goals as Charlton won the Division One title to win promotion back to the Premiership.
Revised:  Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season at the club, with him scoring seven league goals , but in his second season Hunt scored twenty four goals as Charlton won the Division One title to win promotion back to the Premiership.
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Original:  Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season at the club, with him scoring seven league goals , but in his second season Hunt scored 24 league goals as Charlton won the Division One title to win promotion back to the Premiership.
Revised:  Charlton were relegated in Hunt's first season at the club, with him scoring seven league goals , but in his second season Hunt scored 24 league goals as Charlton won Division One to win promotion back to the Premiership.
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Original:  However, he retired early from football during the 2000–01 season due to chronic fatigue syndrome , although he did manage to score four goals in eight Premier League appearances that season .
Revised:  However, he retired early from football during the 2000–01 season due to chronic fatigue syndrome .
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Original:  Hunt returned to Charlton briefly in 2003 to try to earn another contract, and played in three reserve games, but was not offered a contract and never played professional football again .
Revised:  Hunt returned to Charlton briefly in 2003 to try to earn another contract, and played in three reserve games, but was not offered a contract .
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Original: Asbestos disease medical articles Thousands of scientific and medical articles have chronicled human understanding of the hazards of asbestos to human life.
Revised: History Thousands of scientific and medical articles have chronicled human understanding of the hazards of asbestos to human life.
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Original:  The client is guided to analyse and reflect on video clips of their own URL Applications include a caregiver and infant (often used in attachment-based therapy), and other education and care home URL VIG is used in more than 15 countries and by at least 4000 URL Video Interaction Guidance has been used where concerns have been expressed over possible parental neglect in cases where the focus child is aged 2–12, and where the child is not the subject of a child protection plan.
Revised:  The client is guided to analyse and reflect on video clips of their own URL Applications include a caregiver and infant (often used in attachment-based therapy), and other education and care home URL VIG is used in more than 15 countries and by at least 4000 practitioners. Video Interaction Guidance has been used where concerns have been expressed over possible parental neglect in cases where the focus child is aged 2–12, and where the child is not the subject of a child protection plan.
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Original:  Journal of Family Psychology, 20, 266-274, referred to in URL VIG has also been found to increase the child sensitivity of URL The limitations of the experimental studies undertaken so far, such as their small number of subjects, are acknowledged, and more research is needed.
Revised:  Journal of Family Psychology, 20, 266-274, referred to in VIG has also been found to increase the child sensitivity of URL The limitations of the experimental studies undertaken so far, such as their small number of subjects, are acknowledged, and more research is needed.
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Original: Video Interaction Guidance, Kennedy et al, published JKP 2011 Recommendations and use VIG is recommended in the UK by NICE (the National Institute for Health and Clinical URL and is one of two interventions recommended by the NSPCC to improve URL It is also recommended for health URL The European Union DataPrev database also recommends URL Training AVIGuk, a UK 'association of supervisors', manages 18 month training programmes in the UK.
Revised: Video Interaction Guidance, Kennedy et al, published JKP 2011 Recommendations and use VIG is recommended in the UK by NICE (the National Institute for Health and Clinical Excellence) and is one of two interventions recommended by the NSPCC to improve URL It is also recommended for health URL The European Union DataPrev database also recommends URL Training AVIGuk, a UK 'association of supervisors', manages 18 month training programmes in the UK.
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Original: Video Interaction Guidance, Kennedy et al, published JKP 2011 Recommendations and use VIG is recommended in the UK by NICE (the National Institute for Health and Clinical URL and is one of two interventions recommended by the NSPCC to improve URL It is also recommended for health URL The European Union DataPrev database also recommends URL Training AVIGuk, a UK 'association of supervisors', manages 18 month training programmes in the UK.
Revised: Video Interaction Guidance, Kennedy et al, published JKP 2011 Recommendations and use VIG is recommended in the UK by NICE (the National Institute for Health and Clinical URL and is one of two interventions recommended by the NSPCC to improve URL It is also recommended for health URL The European Union DataPrev database also recommends VIG. Training AVIGuk, a UK 'association of supervisors', manages 18 month training programmes in the UK.
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Original:  Most research results have involved guiders who have undertaken such URL
Revised:  Most research results have involved guiders who have undertaken such training.
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