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Original: Gross asked Doughty if the depictions of death in beheading videos is comparable to the immediate experience of death she advocates, and Doughty said they were in no way similar, one "a form of psychological terror" and the other "a dead body in its natural state."
Revised: Gross asked Doughty if people seeking out and witnessing death in beheading videos is comparable to the immediate experience of death she advocates, and Doughty said they were in no way similar, one "a form of psychological terror" and the other "a dead body in its natural state."
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Original: Gross asked Doughty if the depictions of death in beheading videos is comparable to the immediate experience of death she advocates, and Doughty said they were in no way similar, one "a form of psychological terror" and the other "a dead body in its natural state."
Revised: Gross asked Doughty if the depictions of death in beheading videos is comparable to the comfortability with death that she advocates, and Doughty said they were in no way similar, one "a form of psychological terror" and the other "a dead body in its natural state."
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Original:  <ref> Protests in Kosovo, Agon Hamza 2013, socialist.ca
Revised:  Protests in Kosovo, Agon Hamza 2013, socialist.ca
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Original:  Sparked by comments in social media, in February more than 1000 people gathered in front of Kosovo's Electricity Corporation building.2013 Protests in Pristina, US Embassy Kosovo The protests continued in the next several weeks, eventually turning into a protest against corruption.
Revised:  Sparked by comments in social media, on February more than 1000 people gathered in front of Kosovo's Electricity Corporation building.2013 Protests in Pristina, US Embassy Kosovo The protests continued in the next several weeks, eventually turning into a protest against corruption.
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Original: ANGAU Hospital , is a major hospital in Lae, Papua New Guinea.
Revised: ANGAU Hospital is a major hospital in Lae, Papua New Guinea.
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Original:   ANGAU stands for the Australian New Guinea Administrative Unit which was a civil administration of  Territory of Papua and the Mandated Territory of New Guinea formed on 21 March 1942 during World War II.
Revised:  ANGAU stands for the Australian New Guinea Administrative Unit which was a civil administration of the Territory of Papua and the Mandated Territory of New Guinea formed on 21 March 1942 during World War II.
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Original:  The civil administration of both Papua and the Mandated Territory of New Guinea were replaced by an Australian Army military government and came under the control of ANGAU from February 1942 until the end of World War II.
Revised:  The civil administration of both Papua and the Mandated Territory of New Guinea was taken over by an Australian Army military government and came under the control of ANGAU from February 1942 until the end of World War II.
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Original:  The 2/7 Australian General Hospital (2/7 AGH) was established during World War 2.
Revised:  During World War II, the 2/7 Australian General Hospital (2/7 AGH) was established during World War 2.
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Original:  The military base hospital was described as a 1200 bed base hospital with "many attractive gardens which are gay with native plants and shrubs" A report to the United Nations reports on the increased in works budget to ₤680,756 which included the construction of the ANGAU Memorial Hospital as a replacement to the war time Lae base hospital.
Revised:  The military base hospital was described as a 1200 bed base hospital with "many attractive gardens which are gay with native plants and shrubs" 
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Original:  Newspaper reports published on July 1951 oppose the construction of the new hospital.
Revised:  Newspaper reports published on July 1951 :
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Original:  Separate wards be used for Europeans and Asiatics or mixed bloods  "  . The ANGAU Memorial hospital was officially opened on April 17 with accommodation for 412 in-patients and will provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost ₤621,000.
Revised:  Separate wards be used for Europeans and Asiatics or mixed bloods . " . The ANGAU Memorial hospital was officially opened on April 17 with accommodation for 412 in-patients and will provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost ₤621,000.
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Original:  Separate wards be used for Europeans and Asiatics or mixed bloods  "  . The ANGAU Memorial hospital was officially opened on April 17 with accommodation for 412 in-patients and will provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost ₤621,000.
Revised:  Separate wards be used for Europeans and Asiatics or mixed bloods " . The ANGAU Memorial Hospital was officially opened on April 17 with accommodation for 412 in-patients and will provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost ₤621,000.
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Original:  Separate wards be used for Europeans and Asiatics or mixed bloods  "  . The ANGAU Memorial hospital was officially opened on April 17 with accommodation for 412 in-patients and will provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost ₤621,000.
Revised:  Separate wards be used for Europeans and Asiatics or mixed bloods " . The ANGAU Memorial hospital was officially opened on April 17 with accommodation for 412 in-patients and to provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost ₤621,000.
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Original:  The hospital had deteriorated over the last 20 years and has been infested with termites.
Revised:  The hospital had deteriorated over the last 20 years and that its buildings had become infested with termites.
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Original:  The renovation of the hospital is a core condition of the asylum-seeker deal between Australia and PNG made on July 19. ANGAU has only 12 of  32 specialists it needs, and just 55 per cent of its 729 total staff.
Revised:  The renovation of the hospital is a core condition of the asylum-seeker deal between Australia and PNG made on July 19. ANGAU has only 12 of the 32 specialists it needs, and just 55 per cent of its 729 total staff.
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Original:  In February 2014, the  Minister for Foreign Affair of Australia stated: "The Australian Government has committed to redevelop the ANGAU Hospital.
Revised:  In February 2014, the Australian Minister for Foreign Affair of Australia stated: "The Australian Government has committed to redevelop the ANGAU Hospital.
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Original:  It was built in 1964 and is run down, it has been attacked by termites over time, there is asbestos in the building, so we need to work very hard to lift the standards to something that is world class ".
Revised:  It was built in 1964 and is run down, it has been attacked by termites over time, there is asbestos in the building, so we need to work very hard to lift the standards to something that is world class ."
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Original:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP  1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945  Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
Revised:  It will take two years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP 1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945 Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
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Original:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP  1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945  Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
Revised:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016–17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP 1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945 Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
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Original:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP  1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945  Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
Revised:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 : James William McKay , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP 1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945 Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
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Original:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP  1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945  Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
Revised:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP (Medical Superintendent) 1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945 Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
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Original:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP  1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945  Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
Revised:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP 1952 –72: Arthur Kenneth (Ken) Jones MBE ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945 Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
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Original:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP  1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945  Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
Revised:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP 1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) See also 1945 Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
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Original:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP  1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945  Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
Revised:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP 1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE References Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
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Original:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP  1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945  Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital References
Revised:  It will take 2 years to plan and design the new Angau hospital, while the major construction work will commence in 2016-17. 1964 (Medical Superintendent) James William McKAY , MBBS, DTM&H, DPH, Dip Ed, FRACGP 1952 - 1972 ( Manager of the Artificial Limb Clinic) Arthur Kenneth (Ken) JONES MBE See also 1945 Photos of 2/7 Australian General Hospital , 1945
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Original:  The ANGAU Memorial Hospital was officially opened on April 17  with accommodation for 412 in-patients and to provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost ₤ 621,000.
Revised:  The ANGAU Memorial Hospital was officially opened on 17 with accommodation for 412 in-patients and to provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost ₤ 621,000.
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Original:  The ANGAU Memorial Hospital was officially opened on April 17  with accommodation for 412 in-patients and to provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost ₤ 621,000.
Revised:  The ANGAU Memorial Hospital was officially opened on April 17 with accommodation for 412 in-patients and to provide specialist services to 620,000 people of the Sepik, Madang and Morobe provinces and cost £ 621,000.
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Original:  The renovation of the hospital is a core condition of the asylum-seeker deal between Australia and PNG made on July 19 , 2013.
Revised:  The renovation of the hospital is a core condition of the asylum-seeker deal between Australia and PNG made on 19 , 2013.
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Original:  The latter, however, recalled the military force sent to assist Manipur and after that years passed without much contact between Manipur State and the British . Manipur was invaded at the onset of the First Anglo-Burmese War, together with Cachar and Assam.
Revised:  The latter, however, recalled the military force sent to assist Manipur . The force was later recalled and then the state was left to its own devices . Manipur was invaded at the onset of the First Anglo-Burmese War, together with Cachar and Assam.
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Original:  However, the Maharaja had already acceded to India on 11 August, whereby he ceded three subjects namely defence, external affairs and communication  to the Union government but gained internal sovereignty over the state.
Revised:  However, the Maharaja had already agree to accede to India on 11 August, whereby he ceded three subjects namely defence, external affairs and communication to the Union government but gained internal sovereignty over the state.
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Original:  However, the Maharaja had already acceded to India on 11 August, whereby he ceded three subjects namely defence, external affairs and communication  to the Union government but gained internal sovereignty over the state.
Revised:  However, the Maharaja had already acceded to India on 11 August, whereby he agreed to cede three subjects namely defence, external affairs and communication to the Union government but gained internal sovereignty over the state.
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Original:  URL to the Union government but gained internal sovereignty over the state .: "Before the controversial merger, both Manipur and India were bound by the Instrument of Accession (IOA) which the King of Manipur signed on 11 August 1947.
Revised:  URL .: "Before the controversial merger, both Manipur and India were bound by the Instrument of Accession (IOA) which the King of Manipur signed on 11 August 1947.
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Original: The Manipur Kingdom was an ancient independent kingdom at the India– Burmah URL that was in subsidiary alliance with British India from 1824, and became a princely state in 1891.
Revised: The Manipur Kingdom was an ancient independent kingdom at the India– Burma URL that was in subsidiary alliance with British India from 1824, and became a princely state in 1891.
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Original:  Kangla means "dry land" in the old Meetei language.
Revised:  Kangla means "dry land" in the old Meitei language.
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Original: thumbnail|One of several RSN junction boxes on the seafloor, Credit: OOI RSN Upon completion in 2014, over 100 cabled seafloor and water column instruments will be operational.
Revised:  Upon completion in 2014, over 100 cabled seafloor and water column instruments will be operational.
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Original: A deep water profiler travels up and down a cable profiling the water-column, Credit: OOI RSN Outreach The University of Washington has welcomed student participation in the implementation of RSN. As of 2014, there have been eight expeditions in which students have had the opportunity to work aboard the R/V Thomas G. Thompson and witness the construction of the cabled observatory.
Revised:  Outreach The University of Washington has welcomed student participation in the implementation of RSN. As of 2014, there have been eight expeditions in which students have had the opportunity to work aboard the R/V Thomas G. Thompson and witness the construction of the cabled observatory.
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Original: German New Guinea Category: Christianity in Papua New Guinea Category: Christian missions Category:Lutheranism in Oceania Category:Conflicts in 1943 Category:1943 in Papua New Guinea Category:South West Pacific theatre of World War II Category:Military campaigns and theatres of World War II involving Australia Category:Battles and operations of World War II involving Papua New Guinea Category:Battles and operations of World War II involving Japan Category:Operation Cartwhe
Revised: German New Guinea Category: Christian missions Category:Lutheranism in Oceania Category:Conflicts in 1943 Category:1943 in Papua New Guinea Category:South West Pacific theatre of World War II Category:Military campaigns and theatres of World War II involving Australia Category:Battles and operations of World War II involving Papua New Guinea Category:Battles and operations of World War II involving Japan Category:Operation Cartwhe
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Original: German New Guinea Category: Christianity in Papua New Guinea Category: Christian missions Category:Lutheranism in Oceania Category:Conflicts in 1943 Category:1943 in Papua New Guinea Category:South West Pacific theatre of World War II Category:Military campaigns and theatres of World War II involving Australia Category:Battles and operations of World War II involving Papua New Guinea Category:Battles and operations of World War II involving Japan Category:Operation Cartwhe
Revised: German New Guinea Category: Christianity in Papua New Guinea Category: Christian missions Category:Lutheranism in Papua New Guinea Category:Conflicts in 1943 Category:1943 in Papua New Guinea Category:South West Pacific theatre of World War II Category:Military campaigns and theatres of World War II involving Australia Category:Battles and operations of World War II involving Papua New Guinea Category:Battles and operations of World War II involving Japan Category:Operation Cartwhe
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Original:  At his inivitation , Mahatma Gandhi, his secretary Mr. Thakkar, the President of the Dalit Sangha, a German journalist, Miss Jamnalal Bajaj and others came to Gonikoppal in Coorg.
Revised:  At his invitation , Mahatma Gandhi, his secretary Mr. Thakkar, the President of the Dalit Sangha, a German journalist, Miss Jamnalal Bajaj and others came to Gonikoppal in Coorg.
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Original: Tangor Tapak is an Indian politician who served as State president of the BJP in Arunachal Pradesh.
Revised: Tangor Tapak is an Indian politician associated with the BJP party in Arunachal Pradesh.
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Original: Connection to Toussaint L'Ouverture According to most URL Louverture, the Haitian revolutionary and first Black governor of Haiti then named Saint-Domingue, was the grandson of Gaou Guinou, he was born in 1743, at : haut du cap which is a region in today Cap-Haitien.
Revised: Connection to Toussaint L'Ouverture According to most URL Louverture, the Haitian revolutionary and first Black governor of Haiti then named Saint-Domingue, was the grandson of Gaou Guinou, he was born in 1743, at haut du cap which is a region in today Cap-Haitien.
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Original: Great Ardra, also known by numerous variant spellings, was a  West African kingdom formerly located on the Slave Coast in what is now southern Benin.
Revised: Great Ardra, also known by numerous variant spellings, was a West African kingdom in what is now southern Benin.
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Original: Connection to Toussaint L'Ouverture According to most URL Toussaint Louverture, the Haitian revolutionary and first Black governor of Haiti then named Saint-Domingue, was the grandson of Gaou Guinou, he was born in 1743, at haut du cap which is a region in today Cap-Haitien .
Revised: Connection to Toussaint L'Ouverture According to most URL Toussaint Louverture, the Haitian revolutionary and first Black governor of Haiti then named Saint-Domingue, was the grandson of Gaou Guinou, he was born in 1743, at Haut du Cap, which is today a region in today Cap-Haitien .
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Original: Connection to Toussaint L'Ouverture According to most URL Toussaint Louverture, the Haitian revolutionary and first Black governor of Haiti then named Saint-Domingue, was the grandson of Gaou Guinou, he was born in 1743, at haut du cap which is a region in today Cap-Haitien .
Revised: Connection to Toussaint L'Ouverture According to most URL Toussaint Louverture, the Haitian revolutionary and first Black governor of Haiti then named Saint-Domingue, was the grandson of Gaou Guinou, he was born in 1743, at haut du cap which is a region in Cap-Haïtien .
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Original: The city and kingdom were supposedly founded by a group of Aja migrants in the 12th or 13th URL Its kings "ruled with the consent of the elders of the people".
Revised: The city and kingdom were supposedly founded by a group of Aja migrants in the 12th or 13th century. Its kings "ruled with the consent of the elders of the people".
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Original:  the route which by repute the father of Toussaint L'Ouverture, the famous general that started the Haitian revolution that lead Jean-Jacques Dessaline to liberate Haiti, had URL History of Dahomey Connection to Toussaint L'Ouverture According to most URL Toussaint Louverture, the Haitian revolutionary and first Black governor of Haiti then named Saint-Domingue, was the grandson of Gaou Guinou, he was born in 1743, at Haut du Cap, which is today a region in Cap-Haïtien.
Revised:  the route which by repute the father of Toussaint L'Ouverture, the famous general that started the Haitian revolution that lead Jean-Jacques Dessaline to liberate Haiti, had taken. Connection to Toussaint L'Ouverture According to most URL Toussaint Louverture, the Haitian revolutionary and first Black governor of Haiti then named Saint-Domingue, was the grandson of Gaou Guinou, he was born in 1743, at Haut du Cap, which is today a region in Cap-Haïtien.
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