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Original:  The White House has also said that Clinton met with the North Korean leader Kim Jong Il  . Clinton traveled to the nation for a "private meeting" with North Korean officials to discuss the detention and possible release of the journalists . ABC News says that the meeting  was "very emotional" and that the U.S. is "hopeful" that Ling and Lee could be home by tomorrow, Wednesday, August 5.
Revised:  The White House has also said that Clinton met with the North Korean leader Kim Jong Il . Clinton traveled to the nation for a "private meeting" with North Korean officials to discuss the detention and possible release of the Ling and Lee . ABC News says that the meeting was "very emotional" and that the U.S. is "hopeful" that Ling and Lee could be home by tomorrow, Wednesday, August 5.
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Original:  The White House has also said that Clinton met with the North Korean leader Kim Jong Il  . Clinton traveled to the nation for a "private meeting" with North Korean officials to discuss the detention and possible release of the journalists . ABC News says that the meeting  was "very emotional" and that the U.S. is "hopeful" that Ling and Lee could be home by tomorrow, Wednesday, August 5.
Revised:  The White House has also said that Clinton met with the North Korean leader Kim Jong Il . Clinton traveled to the nation for a "private meeting" with North Korean officials to discuss the detention and possible release of the journalists . ABC News earlier stated that the meeting was "very emotional" and that the U.S. is "hopeful" that Ling and Lee could be home by tomorrow, Wednesday, August 5.
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Original:  The White House has also said that Clinton met with the North Korean leader Kim Jong Il  . Clinton traveled to the nation for a "private meeting" with North Korean officials to discuss the detention and possible release of the journalists . ABC News says that the meeting  was "very emotional" and that the U.S. is "hopeful" that Ling and Lee could be home by tomorrow, Wednesday, August 5.
Revised:  The White House has also said that Clinton met with the North Korean leader Kim Jong Il . Clinton traveled to the nation for a "private meeting" with North Korean officials to discuss the detention and possible release of the journalists . ABC News says that the meeting was "very emotional" and that the U.S. was "hopeful" that Ling and Lee could be home by tomorrow, Wednesday, August 5.
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Original:  The report goes on to say that the journalists may even come back to the U.S. with Clinton . Spokesman for the White House, Robert Gibbs says that they have no official comment on Clinton's meeting as of yet.
Revised:  The report goes on to say that the journalists may even come back to the U.S. with Clinton Spokesman for the White House, Robert Gibbs says that they have no official comment on Clinton's meeting as of yet.
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Original:  Clinton traveled to the nation for a "private meeting" with North Korean officials to discuss the detention and possible release of the Ling and Lee.
Revised:  Clinton traveled to the nation for a "private meeting" with North Korean officials to discuss the detention and possible release of Ling and Lee.
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Original:  ABC News earlier stated that the meeting between Clinton and the journalists was "very emotional"  and that the U.S. was "hopeful" that Ling and Lee would be released.
Revised:  ABC News earlier stated that the meeting between Clinton and the journalists was "very emotional" , and that the U.S. was "hopeful" that Ling and Lee would be released.
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Original: Ling and Lee were arrested in late March of this year after they allegedly crossed into North Korea from China illegally.
Revised: Ling and Lee were arrested in late March after allegedly crossing into North Korea from China illegally.
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Original:  This comes after former U.S. President Bill Clinton met with the North Korean leader Kim Jong Il and the two journalists earlier today.
Revised:  This comes after former U.S. President Bill Clinton met with the North Korean leader Kim Jong-il and the two journalists earlier today.
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Original:  They were not handcuffed and were provided with good food , including chocolates a hot lunch of fish & chips  .
Revised:  They were not handcuffed and were provided with good food . The meal consisted of a hot lunch of fish & chips .
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Original:  Reports say the gunman is among the dead.
Revised:  The gunman is believed to be among the dead.
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Original:  At least 30 people are reported to have been in the room at the time of the shooting  [   ] 
Revised:  At least 30 people are reported to have been in the room at the time of the shooting . [ ] 
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Original:  At least 30 people are reported to have been in the room at the time of the shooting  [   ] 
Revised:  At least 30 people are reported to have been in the room at the time of the shooting [... ] 
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Original:  At least 30 people are reported to have been in the room at the time of the shooting  [   ] 
Revised:  At least 30 people are reported to have been in the room at the time of the shooting [ ...] 
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Original: At least four people have been shot and killed and another 10 were wounded when a gunman opened fire inside a LA Fitness Center in Bridgeville, Pennsylvania located in the United States .
Revised: Four people have been shot and killed and another 10 were wounded when a gunman opened fire inside a LA Fitness Center in Bridgeville, Pennsylvania located in the United States .
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Original: At least four people have been shot and killed and another 10 were wounded when a gunman opened fire inside a LA Fitness Center in Bridgeville, Pennsylvania located in the United States .
Revised: At least four people have been shot and killed and another 10 were wounded when a gunman opened fire inside a LA Fitness Center in Bridgeville, Pennsylvania .
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Original:  The gunman is believed to be among the dead.
Revised:  The gunman was among the dead.
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Original:  (Authorities initially reported that five were killed but later revised the figure.) Reports say the unnamed man walked into a dance room where an all-female Latin dance class was in session, turned off the lights and began to shoot people.
Revised:  Reports say the unnamed man walked into a dance room where an all-female Latin dance class was in session, turned off the lights and began to shoot people.
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Original: Four people have been shot and killed and at least 15 wounded when a gunman opened fire inside a LA Fitness Center in Bridgeville, Pennsylvania.
Revised: Four people have been shot and killed and at least 15 wounded when a gunman opened fire inside a LA Fitness center in Bridgeville, Pennsylvania.
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Original:  Reports say the unnamed man walked into a dance room where an all-female Latin dance class was in session, turned off the lights and began to shoot people.
Revised:  Reports say the man walked into a dance room where an all-female Latin dance class was in session, turned off the lights and began to shoot people.
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Original:  When he began firing, she reported that she ran out of the gym and escaped in passerby's car
Revised:  When he began firing, she reported , she ran out of the gym and escaped in passerby's car
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Original:  Mike Hentosz, a witness who was inside the gym, said, "I feel like it's a dream.
Revised: The shooter was George Sodini, a 48-year-old resident of Scott Township. The shooter had chronicled his growing hatred toward women on a website registered to his name. The website explains his developing frustration with women and his reason to carry out the shooting. Sodini refers to the shooting as his "exit plan." Mike Hentosz, a witness who was inside the gym, said, "I feel like it's a dream.
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Original:  The first of two post-mortemsconcluded that Tomlinson had died of a heart attack.
Revised:  The first of two post-mortems concluded that Tomlinson had died of a heart attack.
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Original: A police constable serving with the Metropolitan Police Service in London, England may be prosecuted for manslaughter over the death of a bystander at a protest that occured during the G-20 summit earlier this year.
Revised: A police constable serving with the Metropolitan Police Service in London, England may be prosecuted for manslaughter over the death of a bystander at a protest that occurred during the G-20 summit earlier this year.
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Original:  After concluding what it says is its largest ever investigation  the Independent Police Complaints Commission (IPCC) has sent its file on the death of Ian Tomlinson to the Crown Prosecution Service (CPS).
Revised:  After concluding what it says is its largest ever investigation , the Independent Police Complaints Commission (IPCC) has sent its file on the death of Ian Tomlinson to the Crown Prosecution Service (CPS).
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Original:  The first of two post-mortems concluded that Tomlinson had died of a heart attack.
Revised:  The first of two postmortems concluded that Tomlinson had died of a heart attack.
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Original:  Following the publication of the post-mortem an American tourist handed over film footage of the moments leading up to Ian Tomlinson's death to The Guardian newspaper.
Revised:  Following the publication of the postmortem an American tourist handed over film footage of the moments leading up to Ian Tomlinson's death to The Guardian newspaper.
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Original:  Subsequent to these revelations a second post-mortem was held, this second post-mortem concluding that internal injuries sustained as a result of his fall were the most likely cause of Tomlinson's death.
Revised:  Subsequent to these revelations a second postmortem was held, this second post-mortem concluding that internal injuries sustained as a result of his fall were the most likely cause of Tomlinson's death.
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Original:  Subsequent to these revelations a second post-mortem was held, this second post-mortem concluding that internal injuries sustained as a result of his fall were the most likely cause of Tomlinson's death.
Revised:  Subsequent to these revelations a second post-mortem was held, this second postmortem concluding that internal injuries sustained as a result of his fall were the most likely cause of Tomlinson's death.
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Original: Ian Tomlinson died on April 1, 2009 from injuries sustained when he was  struck and pushed to the ground by a police officer.
Revised: Ian Tomlinson died on April 1, 2009 from injuries sustained when he was allegedly struck and pushed to the ground by a police officer.
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Original:  Following the publication of the postmortem  an American tourist handed over film footage of the moments leading up to Ian Tomlinson's death to The Guardian newspaper.
Revised:  Following the publication of the postmortem , an American tourist handed over film footage of the moments leading up to Ian Tomlinson's death to The Guardian newspaper.
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Original:  A request was made by the police service for the police constable filmed to make himself known, an individual came forward and was questioned under caution , he remains suspended from duty.
Revised:  A request was made by the police service for the police constable filmed to make himself known, an individual came forward and was questioned under caution . He remains suspended from duty.
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Original:  Photo credit:An anonymous American tourist who relinquished his copyright Tomlinson was an innocent bystander caught in the police cordon at the G-20 Meltdown protest near the Bank of England.
Revised:  Tomlinson was an innocent bystander caught in the police cordon at the G-20 Meltdown protest near the Bank of England.
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Original: Garth Drabinsky and Myron Gottlieb, founders of Live Entertainment Corporation of Canada, Inc. (Livent Inc. ) in Toronto Ontario, were sentenced Wednesday to concurrent prison terms for corporate fraud and forgery which resulted in millions of dollars in losses to their investors for close to a decade.
Revised: Garth Drabinsky and Myron Gottlieb, founders of Live Entertainment Corporation of Canada, Inc. (Livent ) in Toronto Ontario, were sentenced Wednesday to concurrent prison terms for corporate fraud and forgery which resulted in millions of dollars in losses to their investors for close to a decade.
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Original: Garth Drabinsky and Myron Gottlieb, founders of Live Entertainment Corporation of Canada, Inc. (Livent Inc. ) in Toronto Ontario, were sentenced Wednesday to concurrent prison terms for corporate fraud and forgery which resulted in millions of dollars in losses to their investors for close to a decade.
Revised: Garth Drabinsky and Myron Gottlieb, founders of Live Entertainment Corporation of Canada, Inc. (Livent Inc. ) in Toronto , Ontario, Canada, were sentenced Wednesday to concurrent prison terms for corporate fraud and forgery which resulted in millions of dollars in losses to their investors for close to a decade.
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Original:  No one gets to write his own rules," said Ontario Superior Court Justice Mary Lou Benotto , "Corporate fraud such as this results in tangible losses to employees, creditors and investors."
Revised:  No one gets to write his own rules," said Ontario Superior Court Justice Mary Lou Benotto . "Corporate fraud such as this results in tangible losses to employees, creditors and investors."
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Original:  Eckstein pleaded guiilty to fraud and testified at the court cast against Drabinsky and Gottleib.
Revised:  Eckstein pleaded guilty to fraud and testified at the court cast against Drabinsky and Gottleib.
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Original:  The Livent company had produced plays such as " The Phantom of the Opera, " " Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat, " "Showboat, " and "Ragtime " in Toronto, before its sale to Michael Ovitz in 1998.
Revised:  The Livent company had produced plays such as The Phantom of the Opera, " " Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat, " "Showboat, " and "Ragtime " in Toronto, before its sale to Michael Ovitz in 1998.
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Original:  The Livent company had produced plays such as " The Phantom of the Opera, " " Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat, " "Showboat, " and "Ragtime " in Toronto, before its sale to Michael Ovitz in 1998.
Revised:  The Livent company had produced plays such as " The Phantom of the Opera, Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat, " "Showboat, " and "Ragtime " in Toronto, before its sale to Michael Ovitz in 1998.
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Original:  The Livent company had produced plays such as " The Phantom of the Opera, " " Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat, " "Showboat, " and "Ragtime " in Toronto, before its sale to Michael Ovitz in 1998.
Revised:  The Livent company had produced plays such as " The Phantom of the Opera, " " Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat, Showboat, and Ragtime in Toronto, before its sale to Michael Ovitz in 1998.
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Original:  Drabinsky and Gottlieb are also charged by the United States attorney's office for misrepensentations of financial worth to the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission
Revised:  Drabinsky and Gottlieb are also facing charges in the United States attorney's office for misrepensentations of financial worth to the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission
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Original:  Drabinsky and Gottlieb are also charged by the United States attorney's office for misrepensentations of financial worth to the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission
Revised:  Drabinsky and Gottlieb are also charged by the United States for misrepresentations of financial worth to the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission
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Original: The Livent company had produced plays such as The Phantom of the Opera, Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat, Showboat , and Ragtime in Toronto, before its sale to Michael Ovitz in 1998.
Revised: The Livent company had produced plays such as The Phantom of the Opera, Joseph and the Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat, Show Boat , and Ragtime in Toronto, before its sale to Michael Ovitz in 1998.
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Original:  File:Toronto Location in Ontario.png|Toronto Ontario "No one is above the law.
Revised:  "No one is above the law.
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Original:  Livent filed a CA$225 million lawsuit agains the former chairman Drabinsky , and former president Gottlieb  who were summarily dismissed.
Revised:  Livent filed a CA$225 million lawsuit against the former chairman Drabinsky , and former president Gottlieb who were summarily dismissed.
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Original:  Livent filed a CA$225 million lawsuit agains the former chairman Drabinsky , and former president Gottlieb  who were summarily dismissed.
Revised:  Livent filed a CA$225 million lawsuit agains the former chairman Drabinsky and former president Gottlieb who were summarily dismissed.
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Original:  Livent filed a CA$225 million lawsuit agains the former chairman Drabinsky , and former president Gottlieb  who were summarily dismissed.
Revised:  Livent filed a CA$225 million lawsuit agains the former chairman Drabinsky , and former president Gottlieb , who were summarily dismissed.
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Original: 400 police officers landed on the auto plant at around 10 a.m with the intention of evicting some 600 striking workers who, according to  union representing the workers, say they "will fight to the death should police forcefully break up the occupation".
Revised: 400 police officers landed on the auto plant at around 10 a.m this morning. Police intend to evict some 600 striking workers who, according to union representing the workers, say they "will fight to the death should police forcefully break up the occupation".
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Original: 400 police officers landed on the auto plant at around 10 a.m with the intention of evicting some 600 striking workers who, according to  union representing the workers, say they "will fight to the death should police forcefully break up the occupation".
Revised: 400 police officers landed on the auto plant at around 10 a.m with the intention of evicting some 600 striking workers who, according to a union representing the workers, say they "will fight to the death should police forcefully break up the occupation".
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Original: Police raided the Ssangsyong auto plant in South Korea today in order to evict workers who have occupying the plant since May in protest of proposed layoffs.
Revised: Police raided the Ssangsyong auto plant in today in order to evict workers who have occupying the plant since May in protest of proposed layoffs.
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Original:  400 police officers landed on the Ssangsyong auto plant South of Seoul at around 10 a.m this morning.
Revised:  400 police officers landed on the Ssangsyong auto plant south of at around 10 a.m this morning.
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Original: 400 police officers landed on the Ssangsyong auto plant south of  at around 10 a.m this morning.
Revised: 400 police officers landed on the Ssangsyong auto plant south of Seoul at around 10 a.m this morning.
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Original: 400 police officers landed on the Ssangsyong auto plant south of Seoul at around 10  a.m this morning.
Revised: 400 police officers raided the auto plant south of Seoul at around 10 a.m this morning.
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Original:  Police intend to evict some 600 striking workers who, according to a union representing the workers, say they "will fight to the death should police forcefully break up the occupation " . Two  workers fell from the four story building while trying to stop the police from landing on the roof, they are injured but not in critical condition.
Revised:  Police intend to evict some 600 striking workers who, according to a union representing the workers, "will fight to the death should police forcefully break up the occupation " . Two workers fell from the four story building while trying to stop the police from landing on the roof, they are injured but not in critical condition.
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Original:  Police intend to evict some 600 striking workers who, according to a union representing the workers, say they "will fight to the death should police forcefully break up the occupation " . Two  workers fell from the four story building while trying to stop the police from landing on the roof, they are injured but not in critical condition.
Revised:  Police intend to evict some 600 striking workers who, according to a union representing the workers, say they "will fight to the death should police forcefully break up the occupation . Two workers fell from the four story building while trying to stop the police from landing on the roof, they are injured but not in critical condition.
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Original:  However, workers say the company should provide a better proposal regarding the layoffs as well as a more reasonable compensation package for layed off workers
Revised:  However, workers say the company should provide a better proposal regarding the layoffs as well as a more reasonable compensation package for workers being laid off
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Original:  The situation has caused the company to lose more than US $$ 184 million in output
Revised:  The situation has caused the company to lose more than US 184 million in output
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Original:  Television ads  in the country state that by doing so, the nation could save over 1,500 gallons of water a year.
Revised:  Television ads being aired in the country state that by doing so, the nation could save over 1,500 gallons of water a year.
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Original:  Television ads  in the country state that by doing so, the nation could save over 1,500 gallons of water a year.
Revised:  Television ads in the country claim that by doing so, the nation could save over 1,500 gallons of water a year.
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Original:  The ending of the ad then states  "Pee in the shower!
Revised:  The ending of the ad then states , "Pee in the shower!
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Original: Ken Livingstone, a former mayor of London, England, proposed a similar campaign in 2006.
Revised: Ken Livingstone, former mayor of London, England, proposed a similar campaign in 2006.
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Original:  They blame the President of the United States George W. Bush for the crisis and they say that Bush supporters are behind an attemptvie of culp against Lula government . Senators who do not belong to the Brazilian ruling party PT warned to a possible "Chavenization" scenario in Brazil
Revised:  They blame the President of the United States George W. Bush for the crisis . They say that the government of Lula is victim of a coup attempt by Bush supporters . Senators who do not belong to the Brazilian ruling party PT warned to a possible "Chavenization" scenario in Brazil
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Original:  Some senators said other parties than the Wokers' Party itself initiated the crisis.
Revised:  Some senators said that only the Wokers' Party itself initiated the crisis.
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Original: They said that they defend the investigation of corruption schemes, however they said that  Lula government is they victim of a destabilization campaign.
Revised: They said that they defend the investigation of corruption schemes, however they said that the Lula government is they victim of a destabilization campaign.
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Original:  The Senator Heloísa Helena from the Socialism and Freedom Party (PSOL) said that the coup idea is nonsense.
Revised:  Senator Heloísa Helena from the Socialism and Freedom Party (PSOL) said that the coup idea is nonsense.
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