wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The WPRFMC also supports fishery development and resource management projects identified in the Marine Conservation Plans of American Samoa, Guam and CNMI through the Western Pacific Sustainable Fisheries Fund (SFF), also established by the MSA. Components of the WPRFMC System The WPRFMC system is composed of Council Members, Council Staff, and advisory bodies that advise the Council and the public that participates in the Council decision-making process.
Revised:  The WPRFMC also supports fishery development and resource management projects identified in the Marine Conservation Plans of American Samoa, Guam and CNMI through the Western Pacific Sustainable Fisheries Fund (SFF), also established by the MSA. Components of the WPRFMC system The WPRFMC system is composed of Council Members, Council Staff, and advisory bodies that advise the Council and the public that participates in the Council decision-making process.
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Original:   The Council has 13 voting members and 3 non-voting members  8 of the 13 voting members are private citizens who are familiar with the commercial and/or non-commercial fisheries, marine conservation or both.
Revised:  The Council has 13 voting members and three non-voting members 8 of the 13 voting members are private citizens who are familiar with the commercial and/or non-commercial fisheries, marine conservation or both.
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Original:   The Council has 13 voting members and 3 non-voting members  8 of the 13 voting members are private citizens who are familiar with the commercial and/or non-commercial fisheries, marine conservation or both.
Revised:  The Council has 13 voting members and 3 non-voting members . 8 of the 13 voting members are private citizens who are familiar with the commercial and/or non-commercial fisheries, marine conservation or both.
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Original:  Advisory Bodies When reviewing potential regulatory changes, the WPRFMC also draws upon the services of knowledgeable people from local and federal agencies, universities and the public, who serve on WPRFMC panels and committees.
Revised:  Advisory bodies When reviewing potential regulatory changes, the WPRFMC also draws upon the services of knowledgeable people from local and federal agencies, universities and the public, who serve on WPRFMC panels and committees.
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Original:  Longline observer coverage (100\% Hawaii swordfish trips, 20\% Hawaii tuna trips, 8-10 \% American Samoa trips).
Revised:  Longline observer coverage (100\% Hawaii swordfish trips, 20\% Hawaii tuna trips, 8–10 \% American Samoa trips).
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Original:  WPRFMC's role The WPRFMC fulfills a central role in the management of the nation's marine fisheries resources.
Revised:  Role The WPRFMC fulfills a central role in the management of the nation's marine fisheries resources.
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Original:  Local roles for the WPRFMC The WPRFMC also plays a significant facilitation role in the Community Demonstration Project Program (CDPP), Community Development Program, and Marine Education and Training Program.
Revised:  Local roles The WPRFMC also plays a significant facilitation role in the Community Demonstration Project Program (CDPP), Community Development Program, and Marine Education and Training Program.
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Original:  Scientific and Statistical Committee (SSC) - The SSC reviews the scientific and technical aspects of fisheries in the western Pacific Region and provides the Council with management recommendations.
Revised:  Scientific and Statistical Committee (SSC) – The SSC reviews the scientific and technical aspects of fisheries in the western Pacific Region and provides the Council with management recommendations.
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Original:  Other Advisory Bodies - The Council convenes and solicits recommendations from a variety of other committees as warranted, such as its Protected Species Advisory Committee, Social Science Planning Committee, Non-Commercial Advisory Committee, Marine Protected Area Advisory Committee, Hawaii Bottomfish Advisory Review Board (BARB), Marine Planning and Climate Change Committee and Fisheries Data Coordinating Committee
Revised:  Other Advisory Bodies – The Council convenes and solicits recommendations from a variety of other committees as warranted, such as its Protected Species Advisory Committee, Social Science Planning Committee, Non-Commercial Advisory Committee, Marine Protected Area Advisory Committee, Hawaii Bottomfish Advisory Review Board (BARB), Marine Planning and Climate Change Committee and Fisheries Data Coordinating Committee
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Original: Products that more accurately imitate the movement of a real horse and are sometimes used for therapeutic purposes as well as for developing equestrian skills or conditioning are the Equicizer , an American-developed mechanical product that resembles the body of a horse, imitates the movement of a race horse, and can be used at slower speeds for therapeutic and rehabilitation purposes.
Revised: Products that more accurately imitate the movement of a real horse and are sometimes used for therapeutic purposes as well as for developing equestrian skills or conditioning are the Equicizer , an American-developed mechanical product that resembles the body of a horse, imitates the movement of a race horse, and can be used at slower speeds for therapeutic and rehabilitation purposes.
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Original:  There is only one model of the horse, with a choice of either a basic head or a carved URL product that resembles and moves like a real horse is the line of Racewood Equestrian Simulators .
Revised:  Another product that resembles and moves like a real horse is the line of Racewood Equestrian Simulators .
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Original:  The models imitate actual movement of horses , from a simple walk trot model, to a model for general riding, to models in various disciplines such as dressage, jumping, and eventing.
Revised:  The models imitate actual movement of horses in various disciplines such as dressage, jumping, and eventing.
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Original:  Horseback therapy has been used by many types of therapists ( ie : physical, occupational, and speech therapists) to advance their physical, mental, emotional, and social skills.
Revised:  Horseback therapy has been used by many types of therapists ( i.e. : physical, occupational, and speech therapists) to advance their physical, mental, emotional, and social skills.
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Original:  Simulators used for therapeutic purposes can be used anywhere ( ie : clinic or a patient home), do not take up much space, and can be programmed to achieve the type of therapy desired.
Revised:  Simulators used for therapeutic purposes can be used anywhere ( i.e. : clinic or a patient home), do not take up much space, and can be programmed to achieve the type of therapy desired.
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Original:  In a 2014 study by Lee et . al , 26 children with cerebral palsy were divided into two groups: a hippotherapy group and a horseback riding simulator group.
Revised:  In a 2014 study by Lee et al. , 26 children with cerebral palsy were divided into two groups: a hippotherapy group and a horseback riding simulator group.
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Original:  Another product that resembles and moves like a real horse is the line of Racewood Equestrian Simulators, with 13 models to imitate actual movement of horses in various disciplines, including a simple walk and trot URL
Revised:  Another product that resembles and moves like a real horse is the line of Racewood Equestrian Simulators, with 13 models to imitate actual movement of horses in various disciplines, including a simple walk and trot model.
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Original: The branch was led by Sun Yat-sen, who would go on to become one of the most important leaders of the Xinhai Revolution of 1911 and the early Republic of China.
Revised: The branch was led by Sun Yat-sen, who would become a leader of the Revolution of 1911 and the early Republic of China.
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Original:   During this period, Sun Yat-sen was associated with the Chinese anarchist Zhang Renjie, who provided a significant amount of his funding . Zhang's daughter Helen would later go on to marry a doctor from Singapore, Robert Lim .
Revised:  During this period, Sun was associated with the Chinese anarchist Zhang Renjie, who provided a significant amount of his funding . Zhang's daughter Helen would later go on to marry a doctor from Singapore, Robert Lim .
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Original:   During this period, Sun Yat-sen was associated with the Chinese anarchist Zhang Renjie, who provided a significant amount of his funding . Zhang's daughter Helen would later go on to marry a doctor from Singapore, Robert Lim .
Revised:  During this period, Sun Yat-sen was associated with the Chinese anarchist Zhang Renjie, who provided a significant amount of Sun's funding ( Zhang's daughter Helen would later go on to marry a doctor from Singapore, Robert Lim .
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Original:   During this period, Sun Yat-sen was associated with the Chinese anarchist Zhang Renjie, who provided a significant amount of his funding . Zhang's daughter Helen would later go on to marry a doctor from Singapore, Robert Lim .
Revised:  During this period, Sun Yat-sen was associated with the Chinese anarchist Zhang Renjie, who provided a significant amount of his funding . Zhang's daughter Helen would later marry a doctor from Singapore, Robert Lim .
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Original:   During this period, Sun Yat-sen was associated with the Chinese anarchist Zhang Renjie, who provided a significant amount of his funding . Zhang's daughter Helen would later go on to marry a doctor from Singapore, Robert Lim .
Revised:  During this period, Sun Yat-sen was associated with the Chinese anarchist Zhang Renjie, who provided a significant amount of his funding . Zhang's daughter Helen would later go on to marry a doctor from Singapore, Robert Lim 
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Original: There is a brief history  anarchism in Singapore.
Revised: There is a brief history of anarchism in Singapore.
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Original: Examples Examples that have been given include: CCD -
Revised: Examples Examples that have been given include: CCD –
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard URL Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko URL Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson URL Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research URL Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg URL Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon URL State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny URL They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh URL Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny (2005) They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec UR
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard URL Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko URL Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson URL Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research URL Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg URL Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon URL State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny URL They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh URL Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec UR
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard URL Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko URL Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson URL Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL URL Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research URL Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg URL Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon URL State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny URL They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh URL Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec UR
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko URL Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny URL They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh URL Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko (2002) Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny URL They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh URL Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko URL Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny URL They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh URL Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
Revised:  Me Not Umbrella by Mark Shepard (2009) Feral Robotic Dogs by Natalie Jeremijenko URL Machine Therapy by Kelly Dobson (2007) Million Dollar Blocks by SIDL (2003) Natural Fuse by Haque Design + Research (2009) Oil Standard by Michael Mandiberg (2006) Spore 1.1 by Douglas Easterly and Matthew Kenyon (2007) State-Machine:Agency by Max Carlson and Ben Cerveny URL They Rule (2001, 2004, 2011) and Exxon Secrets (2014) by Josh On Unfluence by Skye Bender-deMoll and Greg Michalec (2007
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Original: Zhong Xiaoyang (born 1962) is a  Chinese-born writer living in Australia.
Revised: Zhong Xiaoyang (born 1962) is a Chinese-born writer currently residing in Australia.
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Original:  Her father , a doctor of Chinese descent, returned to China from Indonesia.
Revised:  Her father was an Indonesian doctor of Chinese descent, returned to China from Indonesia.
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Original:  The family moved to Hong Kong when she was five months old.
Revised:  The family moved to Hong Kong when Zhong was five months old.
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Original:  She attended Maryknoll Girls' School in Hong Kong and then studied film at Michigan University .
Revised:  There, she attended Maryknoll Girls' School in Hong Kong and then studied film at Michigan University .
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Original: Zhong Xiaoyang (born 1962) is a modern Chinese-born writer currently residing in Australia.
Revised: Zhong Xiaoyang is a modern Chinese-born writer currently residing in Australia.
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Original:  There, she attended Maryknoll Girls' School in Hong Kong and then studied film at University of Michigan.
Revised:  There, she attended Maryknoll Girls' School in Hong Kong and then came to America to study film at University of Michigan.
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Original:  Monorhyme: "aaaaa...", an identical rhyme on every line, common in Latin and Arabic Nonet, a nine-line poem with a decreasing number of syllables in each line, the first line with nine syllables and the final line with a single syllable.
Revised:  Monorhyme: "aaaaa...", an identical rhyme on every line, common in Latin and Arabic 
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Original:  short-long Trochee or Choreus, choree :
Revised:  short-long Trochee (aka choreus or choree) :
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Original:  long-long Pyrrhic or dibrach :
Revised:  long-long Pyrrhic (aka dibrach) :
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