wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  GOARN, as per the request of the Ministry of Health of Iraq for support and training in outbreak response, deployed a multidisciplinary team of six experts to the Northern Iraqian Dohuk and Erbil camps to assist with assessing the risk of cholera and other diseases as well as assisting MoH to prepare for response to the diseases.
Revised:  GOARN, as per the request of the Ministry of Health of Iraq for support and training in outbreak response, deployed a multidisciplinary team of six experts to the North-Iraqi Dohuk and Erbil camps to assist with assessing the risk of cholera and other diseases as well as assisting MoH to prepare for response to the diseases.
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Original:  They spoke a proto-Mongolian language and their culture was associated with the Upper Xiajiadian culture, characterized by the practice of agriculture and animal husbandry supplemented by handicrafts and bronze art.
Revised:  They spoke a Para-Mongolic language and their culture was associated with the Upper Xiajiadian culture, characterized by the practice of agriculture and animal husbandry supplemented by handicrafts and bronze art.
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Original:  Jacques Gernet, A History of Chinese Civilization  Cambridge University Press 1996 P.186-87Peter Van Der Veer, "III.
Revised:  A History of Chinese Civilization Cambridge University Press 1996 P.186-87Peter Van Der Veer, "III.
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Original:  Jacques Gernet, A History of Chinese Civilization  Cambridge University Press 1996 P.186-87Peter Van Der Veer, "III.
Revised:  Jacques Gernet, A History of Chinese Civilization , Jacques Gernet, Cambridge University Press 1996 P.186-87Peter Van Der Veer, "III.
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Original:  another people of Donghu descent were the Rouran (Proto-Mongolic tribe) and the Jurchen (ancestors of the Manchus).
Revised:  Other peoples of Donghu descent were the Rouran (Proto-Mongolic tribe) and the Jurchen (ancestors of the Manchus).
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Original:  another people of Donghu descent were the Rouran (Proto-Mongolic tribe) and the Jurchen (ancestors of the Manchus).
Revised:  another people of Donghu descent were the Rouran (Proto-Mongolic tribe) and Jurchens (ancestors of the Manchus).
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Original:  They spoke a Para-Mongolic language and their culture was associated with the Upper Xiajiadian culture, characterized by the practice of agriculture and animal husbandry supplemented by handicrafts and bronze art.
Revised:  Their culture was associated with the Upper Xiajiadian culture, characterized by the practice of agriculture and animal husbandry supplemented by handicrafts and bronze art.
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Original: Early life and education Born to Narayan Chandra Bashak, a popular makeup artist in Mymensingh, a city in Mymensingh District in the central region of Bangladesh, Shyamal was instructed in the arts from a young age.
Revised: Early life and education Born to Narayan Chandra Bashak, a prominent makeup artist in Mymensingh, a city in Mymensingh District in the central region of Bangladesh, Shyamal was instructed in the arts from a young age.
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Original:  Following a conference of the Association of Science-Technology Centers held in Montreal Bashak made the decision to stay in Canada for fear of continuing attempts on his life.
Revised:  Following a conference of the Association of Science-Technology Centers held in Montreal Bashak made the decision to seek refuge in Canada for fear of continuing attempts on his life.
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Original: Career After completing his Masters, Bashak would participate in both group and solo exhibitions including "Life Line & Light" a three man exhibition at the Bangladesh National Museum, and "Save Human" a set of 4 exhibitions to raise funds for flood relief in Bangladesh.
Revised: Career After completing his Masters, Bashak would participate in both group and solo exhibitions including "Life Line & Light" a three-man exhibition at the Bangladesh National Museum, and "Save Human" a set of 4 exhibitions to raise funds for flood relief in Bangladesh.
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Original:  The severity of the assault and his prominence led to the attack being covered across Bangladesh, which led to further attempts on his life including a shooting in December of 2013 which, while not killing Bashak resulted in him crashing his motorcycle and receiving serious injuries, and a firebombing of his home a year later.
Revised:  The severity of the assault and his prominence led to the attack being covered across Bangladesh, which led to further attempts on his life including a shooting in December 2013 which, while not killing Bashak resulted in him crashing his motorcycle and receiving serious injuries, and a firebombing of his home a year later.
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Original:  Following a conference of the Association of Science-Technology Centers held in Montreal Bashak made the decision to seek refuge in Canada for fear of continuing attempts on his life.
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Original:  He would go on to receive his Masters of Fine Arts in Printmaking from the Faculty of Fine Arts, University of Dhaka where he would attract attention by receiving the Dhaka University Central Student's Union's Ekushey Padak for his design work commemorating the Language Movement.
Revised:  He would go on to receive his Masters of Fine Arts in printmaking from the Faculty of Fine Arts, University of Dhaka where he would attract attention by receiving the Dhaka University Central Student's Union's Ekushey Padak for his design work commemorating the Language Movement.
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Original:  Career After completing his Masters , Bashak would participate in both group and solo exhibitions including "Life Line & Light" a three-man exhibition at the Bangladesh National Museum, and "Save Human" a set of 4 exhibitions to raise funds for flood relief in Bangladesh.
Revised:  Career After completing his master's degree , Bashak would participate in both group and solo exhibitions including "Life Line & Light" a three-man exhibition at the Bangladesh National Museum, and "Save Human" a set of 4 exhibitions to raise funds for flood relief in Bangladesh.
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Original: State of California Ocean Protection Council, 2009, Mapping California's URL References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links NOAA Ocean Explorer Schmidt Ocean Institute: Seafloor Mapping Seafloormapping.co.uk Seabed 2030 Category:Hydrography Category:Oceanograp
Revised: State of California Ocean Protection Council, 2009, Mapping California's References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links NOAA Ocean Explorer Schmidt Ocean Institute: Seafloor Mapping Seafloormapping.co.uk Seabed 2030 Category:Hydrography Category:Oceanograp
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Original: State of California Ocean Protection Council, 2009, Mapping California's URL References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links NOAA Ocean Explorer Schmidt Ocean Institute: Seafloor Mapping Seafloormapping.co.uk Seabed 2030 Category:Hydrography Category:Oceanograp
Revised: State of California Ocean Protection Council, 2009, Mapping California's URL %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links NOAA Ocean Explorer Schmidt Ocean Institute: Seafloor Mapping Seafloormapping.co.uk Seabed 2030 Category:Hydrography Category:Oceanograp
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Original: State of California Ocean Protection Council, 2009, Mapping California's URL References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links NOAA Ocean Explorer Schmidt Ocean Institute: Seafloor Mapping Seafloormapping.co.uk Seabed 2030 Category:Hydrography Category:Oceanograp
Revised: State of California Ocean Protection Council, 2009, Mapping California's URL References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Hydrography Category:Oceanograp
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Original: State of California Ocean Protection Council, 2009, Mapping California's UR   
Revised: State of California Ocean Protection Council, 2009, Mapping California's URL 
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Original: LiDAR LiDAR, Light Detection and Ranging, is  a remote sensing method that uses light in the form of a pulsed laser to measure distances  .
Revised: LiDAR LiDAR, Light Detection and Ranging, is a remote sensing method that uses light in the form of a pulsed laser to measure distances " .
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Original:  These light pulses, along with other data, generate a three-dimensional representation of whatever the light pulses reflect off  giving an accurate representation of the surface characteristics.
Revised:  These light pulses, along with other data, generate a three-dimensional representation of whatever the light pulses reflect off , giving an accurate representation of the surface characteristics.
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Original:  The British Antarctic Survey is assisting the effort by varying the routes of its boats in order to map different parts of the sea floor  
Revised:  The British Antarctic Survey is assisting the effort by varying the routes of its boats in order to map different parts of the sea floor . 
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Original:  Conditions in the water column change with distance from the surface (depth) : the pressure increases;
Revised:  Conditions in the water column change with depth : the pressure increases;
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Original: The pelagic zone consists of the water column of the open ocean, and can be further divided into regions by depth, as illustrated on the right.
Revised: The pelagic zone consists of the water cum of the open ocean, and can be further divided into regions by depth, as illustrated on the right.
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Original:  the temperature and amount of light decreases ;
Revised:  the temperature and amount of light decrease ;
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Original:  the salinity and amount of dissolved oxygen , as well as micronutrients such as iron, magnesium and calcium , all change.
Revised:  the salinity and amount of dissolved oxygen ( as well as micronutrients such as iron, magnesium and calcium , all change.
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Original:  the salinity and amount of dissolved oxygen , as well as micronutrients such as iron, magnesium and calcium , all change.
Revised:  the salinity and amount of dissolved oxygen , as well as micronutrients such as iron, magnesium and calcium ) all change.
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Original:  The name stems .
Revised: ← The name stems .
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Original:  Business journalists have often adopted this approach, which assumes that the corporate achievements, especially in the arena of manufacturing, were produced by unique talented individuals, especially the "heroic CEO".
Revised:  Business journalists have often adopted this approach, which assumes that the corporate achievements, especially in the arena of manufacturing, are produced by unique talented individuals, especially the "heroic CEO".
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Original:  The model is the celebrity in entertainment, sports, and politics  . Guthey et al. argue that "...these individuals are not self-made, but rather are created by a process of widespread media exposure to the point that their actions, personalities, and even private lives function symbolically to represent significant dynamics and tensions prevalent in the contemporary business atmosphere . "  Eric Guthey and Timothy Clark, Demystifying Business Celebrity (2009).
Revised:  The model is the celebrity in entertainment, sports, and politics . Guthey et al. argue that "...these individuals are not self-made, but rather are created by a process of widespread media exposure to the point that their actions, personalities, and even private lives function symbolically to represent significant dynamics and tensions prevalent in the contemporary business atmosphere " Eric Guthey and Timothy Clark, Demystifying Business Celebrity (2009).
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Original:  The model is the celebrity in entertainment, sports, and politics  . Guthey et al. argue that "...these individuals are not self-made, but rather are created by a process of widespread media exposure to the point that their actions, personalities, and even private lives function symbolically to represent significant dynamics and tensions prevalent in the contemporary business atmosphere . "  Eric Guthey and Timothy Clark, Demystifying Business Celebrity (2009).
Revised:  The model is the celebrity in entertainment, sports, and politics . Guthey et al. argue that "...these individuals are not self-made, but rather are created by a process of widespread media exposure to the point that their actions, personalities, and even private lives function symbolically to represent significant dynamics and tensions prevalent in the contemporary business atmosphere . " . Eric Guthey and Timothy Clark, Demystifying Business Celebrity (2009).
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Original:  Journalism thereby exaggerates the importance of the CEO and tends to neglect the harder-to-describe broader corporate factors.
Revised:  Journalism thereby exaggerates the importance of the CEO and tends to neglect harder-to-describe broader corporate factors.
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Original:  "Believing one's own press: The causes and consequences of CEO celebrity . "  Strategic Management Journal 25#7 (2004): 637-653   .
Revised:  "Believing one's own press: The causes and consequences of CEO celebrity " Strategic Management Journal 25#7 (2004): 637-653 .
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Original:  "Believing one's own press: The causes and consequences of CEO celebrity . "  Strategic Management Journal 25#7 (2004): 637-653   .
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Original:  "Believing one's own press: The causes and consequences of CEO celebrity . "  Strategic Management Journal 25#7 (2004): 637-653   .
Revised:  "Believing one's own press: The causes and consequences of CEO celebrity . " Strategic Management Journal 25#7 (2004): 637-653 . .
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Original:  In the non-profit and government sector , CEOs typically aim at achieving outcomes related to the organization's mission.
Revised:  In the non-profit and government sector . CEOs typically aim at achieving outcomes related to the organization's mission.
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Original:  In the non-profit and government sector . CEOs typically aim at achieving outcomes related to the organization's mission.
Revised:  In the non-profit and government sector , CEOs typically aim at achieving outcomes related to the organization's mission.
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Original: A chief executive officer  (CEO), chief administrator, or just chief executive (CE), is one of a number of corporate executives in charge of managing an organization especially an independent legal entity such as a company or nonprofit institution.
Revised: A chief executive officer PowellJosephMarcus (CEO), chief administrator, or just chief executive (CE), is one of a number of corporate executives in charge of managing an organization especially an independent legal entity such as a company or nonprofit institution.
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Original:  A really small number of worldwide transboundary breeds compose the ever-increasing share of total global animal products.
Revised:  A relatively small number of worldwide transboundary breeds compose the ever-increasing share of total global animal products.
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Original:  Only in North America and the Southwest Pacific that a few transboundary breed populations surpass that of regional types .Sep. 2013.
Revised:  However, only in North America and the Southwest Pacific that a few transboundary breed populations surpass that of regional types .Sep. 2013.
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Original:  Only in North America and the Southwest Pacific that a few transboundary breed populations surpass that of regional types .Sep. 2013.
Revised:  Only in North America and the Southwest Pacific do the number of transboundary breeds surpass that of regional types .Sep. 2013.
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Original:  Only in North America and the Southwest Pacific that a few transboundary breed populations surpass that of regional types .Sep. 2013.
Revised:  Only in North America and the Southwest Pacific that a few transboundary breed populations surpass that of local breeds .Sep. 2013.
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Original:  With the Selers  Ramírez was introduced to the study of archeology and she accompanied them in several expeditions to archeological sites and took up the study of ancient architecture and pottery, as the first female archeologist in Mexico.
Revised:  With the Selers , Ramírez was introduced to the study of archeology and she accompanied them in several expeditions to archeological sites and took up the study of ancient architecture and pottery, as the first female archeologist in Mexico.
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Original:  With the Selers, Ramírez was introduced to the study of archeology and she accompanied them in several expeditions to archeological sites and took up the study of ancient architecture and pottery, as the first female archeologist in Mexico.
Revised:  With the Selers, Ramírez was introduced to the study of archaeology and she accompanied them in several expeditions to archeological sites and took up the study of ancient architecture and pottery, as the first female archeologist in Mexico.
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Original:  With the Selers, Ramírez was introduced to the study of archeology and she accompanied them in several expeditions to archeological sites and took up the study of ancient architecture and pottery, as the first female archeologist in Mexico.
Revised:  With the Selers, Ramírez was introduced to the study of archeology and she accompanied them in several expeditions to archaeological sites and took up the study of ancient architecture and pottery, as the first female archeologist in Mexico.
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Original:  With the Selers, Ramírez was introduced to the study of archeology and she accompanied them in several expeditions to archeological sites and took up the study of ancient architecture and pottery, as the first female archeologist in Mexico.
Revised:  With the Selers, Ramírez was introduced to the study of archeology and she accompanied them in several expeditions to archeological sites and took up the study of ancient architecture and pottery, as the first female archaeologist in Mexico.
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Original: Isabel Ramírez Castaneda (1881–1943) was  the first Mexican woman archaeologist and ethnologist from Milpa Alta.
Revised: Isabel Ramírez Castaneda (1881–1943) was the first Mexican women to work as an archaeologist and ethnologist from Milpa Alta.
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Original:  Biography Originally a kindergarten teacher , she  won a scholarship in 1906 to study archaeology, history and ethnology at the National Museum of Mexico , which she was connected to for much of her career.
Revised:  Biography Originally a kindergarten teacher , she won a scholarship to study archaeology, history and ethnology at the National Museum of Mexico , which she was connected to for much of her career.
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Original:  Biography Originally a kindergarten teacher , she  won a scholarship in 1906 to study archaeology, history and ethnology at the National Museum of Mexico , which she was connected to for much of her career.
Revised:  Biography Originally a kindergarten teacher , she won a scholarship in 1906 to study archaeology, history and ethnology at the National Museum (Museo Nacional de Antropología) , which she was connected to for much of her career.
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Original:  Biography Originally a kindergarten teacher , she  won a scholarship in 1906 to study archaeology, history and ethnology at the National Museum of Mexico , which she was connected to for much of her career.
Revised:  Biography Originally a kindergarten teacher , she won a scholarship in 1906 to study archaeology, history and ethnology at the National Museum of Mexico , which she was affiliated to for much of her career.
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Original:  Through this work she met archaeologists Eduard Seler and Caecilie Seler-Sachs when they traveled in Mexico, they in turn met Franz Boas when he visited Mexico and she became a sort of protégée of his.
Revised:  Isabel also met Franz Boas when he visited Mexico and she became a sort of protégée of his.
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Original:  A special form of mycoheterotrophic association, which appears to be a chimera between the haustorial parasitism of a parasitic plant and mycohetertrophy , is observed in Parasitaxus usta, the only mycoheterotrophic gymnosperm.
Revised:  A special form of mycoheterotrophic association, which appears to be a chimera between the haustorial parasitism of a parasitic plant and mycoheterotrophy , is observed in Parasitaxus usta, the only mycoheterotrophic gymnosperm.
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Original:  She was buried in the Catholic section of Papaloa Cemetery and a white bronze grave monuments marks her final resting place.;
Revised:  She was buried in the Catholic section of Papaloa Cemetery and a white bronze grave monument marks her final resting place.;
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Original:  According to historian John Tayman, Mary may had also contracted leprosy and they had a daughter who did not suffer the same infection as her parents.
Revised:  According to historian John Tayman, Mary may have also contracted leprosy and they had a daughter who did not suffer the same infection as her parents.
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Original:  According to resident physician Dr.
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Original:  Arthur Albert St. M. Mouritz , he "displayed marked ability and highly creditable administrative powers for a man so young."
Revised:  Arthur Albert St. Mouritz , he "displayed marked ability and highly creditable administrative powers for a man so young."
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Original:  T. S. Eliot claimed in Tradition and the individual talent, published in 1919, that in order for a poet to fully come into his own, he must be aware of his predecessors, and view the work of his predecessors as living, not dead.
Revised:  T. S. Eliot claimed in Tradition and the individual talent, published in 1919, that for a poet to fully come into his own, he must be aware of his predecessors, and view the work of his predecessors as living, not dead.
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Original:  The poetic tradition is a line of descent of poets who have achieved a sublime state and can surrender themselves to their work in order to create a poem which both builds on existing tradition and stands on its own.
Revised:  The poetic tradition is a line of descent of poets who have achieved a sublime state and can surrender themselves to their work to create a poem which both builds on existing tradition and stands on its own.
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Original:  The poetic tradition is a line of descent of poets who have achieved a sublime state and can surrender themselves to their work in order to create a poem which both builds on existing tradition and stands on its own.
Revised:  The poetic tradition is a line of descent of poets who have achieved a sublime state and can surrender themselves to their work in order to create a poem that both builds on existing tradition and stands on its own.
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Original:  Virginia Woolf addressed the question of a woman’s place in poetic tradition in A Room of One’s Own, asserting that  a woman (or indeed any poet) required personal space, financial support, and literary freedom in order to produce artistic works .
Revised:  Virginia Woolf addressed the question of a woman’s place in poetic tradition in A Room of One’s Own, asserting that , to produce artistic works, a woman (or indeed any poet) required personal space, financial support, and literary freedom in order to produce artistic works .
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