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Original:  — — — — 2005–06 Val-d 'Or Foreurs QMJHL 20 2 18 20 54 — — — — — 2005–06 Moncton Wildcats QMJHL 10 1 7 8 8 16 0 3 3 22 2006–07 Vancouver Canucks NHL 9 0 0 0 4 — — — — — 2006–07 Moncton Wildcats QMJHL 13 3 11 14 28 — — — — — 2006–07 Cape Breton Screaming Eagles QMJHL 23 1 5 6 45 16 2 11 13 28 2006–07 Manitoba Moose AHL — — — — — 5 0 0 0 2 2007–08 Vancouver Canucks NHL 27 2 0 2 20 — — — — — 2007–08 Manitoba Moose AHL 41 6 8 14 68 6 0 0 0 8NHL totals 36 2 0 2 24 — — — — —
Revised:  — — — — 2005–06 Val–d 'Or Foreurs QMJHL 20 2 18 20 54 — — — — — 2005–06 Moncton Wildcats QMJHL 10 1 7 8 8 16 0 3 3 22 2006–07 Vancouver Canucks NHL 9 0 0 0 4 — — — — — 2006–07 Moncton Wildcats QMJHL 13 3 11 14 28 — — — — — 2006–07 Cape Breton Screaming Eagles QMJHL 23 1 5 6 45 16 2 11 13 28 2006–07 Manitoba Moose AHL — — — — — 5 0 0 0 2 2007–08 Vancouver Canucks NHL 27 2 0 2 20 — — — — — 2007–08 Manitoba Moose AHL 41 6 8 14 68 6 0 0 0 8NHL totals 36 2 0 2 24 — — — — —
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Original:  Zoroaster in  Persia;
Revised:  Zoroaster in Ancient Persia;
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Original: Prehistoric human thought [[File:Lascaux painting.jpg|Lascaux cave paintings from France]] Prehistory cover human intellectual history before the invention of writing.
Revised: Prehistoric human thought [[File:Lascaux painting.jpg|Lascaux cave paintings from France]] Prehistory covers human intellectual history before the invention of writing.
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Original:  The first identified cultures are from the Upper Paleolithic era, evidenced by regional patterns in artefacts such as cave art, Venus figurines, and stone tools  The Aterian culture was engaged in symbolically constituted material culture, creating what are amongst the earliest African examples of personal ornamentation.
Revised:  The first identified cultures are from the Upper Paleolithic era, evidenced by regional patterns in artefacts such as cave art, Venus figurines, and stone tools . The Aterian culture was engaged in symbolically constituted material culture, creating what are amongst the earliest African examples of personal ornamentation.
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Original:  Sodium fires are prevented in nuclear reactors by isolating sodium from oxygen by surrounding sodium pipes with inert gas.
Revised:  Sodium fires are prevented in nuclear reactors by isolating sodium from oxygen with surrounding sodium pipes with inert gas.
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Original:  Sodium fires are prevented in nuclear reactors by isolating sodium from oxygen with surrounding sodium pipes with inert gas.
Revised:  Sodium fires are prevented in nuclear reactors by isolating sodium from oxygen with surrounding sodium pipes containing inert gas.
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Original:  The first and second ionization energies are 495.8 kJ/mol and 4562 kJ/mol ) , respectively.
Revised:  The first and second ionization energies are 495.8 kJ/mol and 4562 kJ/mol , respectively.
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Original: High    blood pressure There is a strong correlation between higher sodium intake and higher blood pressure.
Revised: High High blood pressure There is a strong correlation between higher sodium intake and higher blood pressure.
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Original:  However, sodium exposed to air and ignited or reaching autoignition (reported to occur when a molten pool of sodium reaches about 290 URL displays a relatively mild fire.
Revised:  However, sodium exposed to air and ignited or reaching autoignition (reported to occur when a molten pool of sodium reaches about ) displays a relatively mild fire.
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Original: In 2009 Adjetey Anang featured in a television commercial for Aquarius (sports drink ).
Revised: In 2009 Adjetey Anang featured in a television commercial for ).
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Original:  He was born in Teshie, Ghana , where he lives and runs the Kane Kwei Carpentry Workshop  . Biography In 2001, he introduced Ghana design coffins at Gidan Makama Museum Kano, Nigeria, under the auspices of Alliance française in Kano.
Revised:  He was born in Teshie, Ghana , where he lives and runs the Kane Kwei Carpentry Workshop remotely . Biography In 2001, he introduced Ghana design coffins at Gidan Makama Museum Kano, Nigeria, under the auspices of Alliance française in Kano.
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Original:   In 2009 Adjetey Anang featured in a television commercial for Aquarius .
Revised:  Career In 2009 Adjetey Anang featured in a television commercial for Aquarius .
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Original:   In 2009 Adjetey Anang featured in a television commercial for Aquarius .
Revised:  In 2009 , Adjetey Anang was featured in a television commercial for Aquarius .
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Original:  Storyboard Aquarius and collaborated with the Oregon College of Art Craft, by organizing a two-month residence in Ghana for artist and Senior Lecturer Michael de Forest.
Revised:  Craft, by organizing a two-month residence in Ghana for artist and Senior Lecturer Michael de Forest.
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Original:  Storyboard Aquarius and collaborated with the Oregon College of Art Craft, by organizing a two-month residence in Ghana for artist and Senior Lecturer Michael de Forest.
Revised:  Storyboard Aquarius and collaborated with the Oregon College of Art Storyboard Aquarius
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Original:  He currently lives in Madison, Wisconsin, to pursue projects, and runs the Kane Kwei Carpentry Workshop remotely . Biography In 2001, he introduced Ghana design coffins at Gidan Makama Museum Kano, Nigeria, under the auspices of Alliance française in Kano.
Revised:  He currently lives in Madison, Wisconsin, where he is pursuing unique projects . Biography In 2001, he introduced Ghana design coffins at Gidan Makama Museum Kano, Nigeria, under the auspices of Alliance française in Kano.
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Original:  After completing his secondary school at the Accra Academy , he took over in    2005  the management of the studio that was established by Seth Kane Kwei, motivated by the ambition to "rise the name of his grand-father and see the world".
Revised:  He completd his secondary school at the Accra Academy , he took over in 2005 the management of the studio that was established by Seth Kane Kwei, motivated by the ambition to "rise the name of his grand-father and see the world".
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Original:  After completing his secondary school at the Accra Academy , he took over in    2005  the management of the studio that was established by Seth Kane Kwei, motivated by the ambition to "rise the name of his grand-father and see the world".
Revised:  After completing his secondary school at the Accra Academy . 2005 the management of the studio that was established by Seth Kane Kwei, motivated by the ambition to "rise the name of his grand-father and see the world".
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Original:  After completing his secondary school at the Accra Academy , he took over in    2005  the management of the studio that was established by Seth Kane Kwei, motivated by the ambition to "rise the name of his grand-father and see the world".
Revised:  After completing his secondary school at the Accra Academy , he took over in Career 2005 the management of the studio that was established by Seth Kane Kwei, motivated by the ambition to "rise the name of his grand-father and see the world".
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Original:  After completing his secondary school at the Accra Academy , he took over in    2005  the management of the studio that was established by Seth Kane Kwei, motivated by the ambition to "rise the name of his grand-father and see the world".
Revised:  After completing his secondary school at the Accra Academy , he took over in 2005 he took over the management of the studio that was established by Seth Kane Kwei, motivated by the ambition to "rise the name of his grand-father and see the world".
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Original:  Career In 2009 , Adjetey Anang was featured in a television commercial for the energy drink Aquarius.
Revised:  Within a short time , Adjetey Anang was featured in a television commercial for the energy drink Aquarius.
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Original:  He collaborated with the Oregon College of Art & Craft by organizing a two-month residence in Ghana for artist and Senior Lecturer Michael de Forest  .
Revised:  He collaborated with the Oregon College of Art & Craft 's Senior Lecturer Michael de Forest .
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Original:  Adjetey Anang also gave coffin-making demonstations showing the process of using hand tools to make hollow, curved, wooden sculptures.
Revised:  Adjetey Anang also gave coffin-making demonstrations showing the process of using hand tools to make hollow, curved, wooden sculptures.
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Original:  There have been various sailing maneuvers recommended and taught to handle man-overboard situations.
Revised: If the vessel has a functioning engine it should be started as soon as possible (after checking for trailing ropes). Once the sails are under control recovery should proceed as for a powerboat. There have been various sailing maneuvers recommended and taught to handle man-overboard situations.
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Original:  There have been various sailing maneuvers recommended and taught to handle man-overboard situations.
Revised:  There have been various sailing manoeuvres recommended and taught to handle man-overboard situations.
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Original:  In many cases, however, the maneuver will have left the boat too far away for that.
Revised:  In many cases, however, the manoeuvre will have left the boat too far away for that.
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Original: Mayday A person in the water is in "grave and imminent danger" which is the test for a "Mayday " call.
Revised: Mayday A person in the water is in "grave and imminent danger" which is the test for a Mayday call.
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Original:  An immediate DSC  (if possible) and Mayday call should be raised so that vessels in the vicinity and rescue service will be alerted at once.
Revised:  An immediate DSC alert (if possible) and Mayday call should be raised so that vessels in the vicinity and rescue service will be alerted at once.
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Original:  Examples of this are shown in the movies Master and Commander: The Far Side of the World and Flags of Our Fathers.
Revised:  An examples of this is shown in the movies Master and Commander: The Far Side of the World and Flags of Our Fathers.
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Original:  Examples of this are shown in the movies Master and Commander: The Far Side of the World and Flags of Our Fathers.
Revised:  Examples of this are shown in the movie Flags of Our Fathers.
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Original:  The answer to a person overboard is never for more people either to jump over to 'help' them, or to fall in themselves by accident.
Revised:  The answer to a person overboard is never for more people either to jump over to "help" them, or to fall in themselves by accident.
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Original:  Dummies are used for man overboard drills.
Revised:  Dummies are used for man-overboard drills.
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Original:  The recovery operation is different for a conscious compared an unconscious casualty, but in either case there are two rules to be aware of.
Revised:  The recovery operation is different for a conscious versus an unconscious casualty, but in either case there are two rules to be aware of.
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Original:  Second, the condition of a person in the early stages of hypothermia can be made considerably worse by hoisting them vertically so that what circulation they have drains from their head into their feet.
Revised:  The condition of a person in the early stages of hypothermia can be made considerably worse by hoisting them vertically so that what circulation they have drains from their head into their feet.
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Original: Relationship with statistics When the scientific method employs statistics as  part of its arsenal, there are mathematical and practical issues that can have a deleterious effect on the reliability of the output of scientific methods.
Revised: Relationship with statistics When the scientific method employs statistics as a key part of its arsenal, there are mathematical and practical issues that can have a deleterious effect on the reliability of the output of scientific methods.
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Original:   The term "scientific method" came into popular use in the twentieth century;
Revised:  Problem-solving via scientific method See Notes section § Problem-solving via scientific method The term "scientific method" came into popular use in the twentieth century;
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Original:  These institutions thereby reduce the research function to a cost/benefit,  is expressed as money, and the time and attention of the researchers to be expended, in exchange for a report to their constituents.
Revised:  These institutions thereby reduce the research function to a cost/benefit, which is expressed as money, and the time and attention of the researchers to be expended, in exchange for a report to their constituents.
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Original:  A child when World War II broke out, he was separated from his Jewish parents in 1944, carried messages for the Resistance,  Obituary: John Rety  , The Daily Telegraph, 1 March 2010 his grandmother was shot on the last day of the war.
Revised:  A child when World War II broke out, he was separated from his Jewish parents in 1944, carried messages for the Resistance, " Obituary: John Rety , The Daily Telegraph, 1 March 2010 his grandmother was shot on the last day of the war.
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Original:  A child when World War II broke out, he was separated from his Jewish parents in 1944, carried messages for the Resistance,  Obituary: John Rety  , The Daily Telegraph, 1 March 2010 his grandmother was shot on the last day of the war.
Revised:  A child when World War II broke out, he was separated from his Jewish parents in 1944, carried messages for the Resistance, Obituary: John Rety " , The Daily Telegraph, 1 March 2010 his grandmother was shot on the last day of the war.
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Original:  A child when World War II broke out, he was separated from his Jewish parents in 1944, carried messages for the Resistance,  Obituary: John Rety  , The Daily Telegraph, 1 March 2010 his grandmother was shot on the last day of the war.
Revised:  A child when World War II broke out, he was separated from his Jewish parents in 1944, carried messages for the Resistance, Obituary: John Rety , The Daily Telegraph, 1 March 2010. his grandmother was shot on the last day of the war.
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Original: Harry Eyres,  Tribute to a well-versed soul  , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier,  Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack  , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
Revised: Harry Eyres, " Tribute to a well-versed soul , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier, Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
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Original: Harry Eyres,  Tribute to a well-versed soul  , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier,  Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack  , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
Revised: Harry Eyres, Tribute to a well-versed soul " , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier, Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
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Original: Harry Eyres,  Tribute to a well-versed soul  , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier,  Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack  , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
Revised: Harry Eyres, Tribute to a well-versed soul , 5 March 2010. In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier, Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
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Original: Harry Eyres,  Tribute to a well-versed soul  , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier,  Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack  , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
Revised: Harry Eyres, Tribute to a well-versed soul , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier, " Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
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Original: Harry Eyres,  Tribute to a well-versed soul  , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier,  Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack  , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
Revised: Harry Eyres, Tribute to a well-versed soul , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier, Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack " , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
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Original: Harry Eyres,  Tribute to a well-versed soul  , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier,  Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack  , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010 he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
Revised: Harry Eyres, Tribute to a well-versed soul , 5 March 2010 In 1947, after performing an anti-war play on the steps of the Budapest parliament,Dan Carrier, Tributes to John Rety, celebrated poet from Torriano Meeting House who has died from a heart attack , Camden New Journal, 11 February 2010. he left for a holiday with his aunt in Britain, and was forced to stay after the aunt burnt his passport.
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Original: Interview with Ian Bone  ) He was active against the Vietnam War, participating in the Grosvenor Square demonstration as well as a thirteen-day fast at Speaker's Corner.
Revised: Interview with Ian Bone . ) He was active against the Vietnam War, participating in the Grosvenor Square demonstration as well as a thirteen-day fast at Speaker's Corner.
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Original: Interview with Ian Bone  ) He was active against the Vietnam War, participating in the Grosvenor Square demonstration as well as a thirteen-day fast at Speaker's Corner.
Revised: Interview with Ian Bone ) He was active against the Vietnam War, participating in the Grosvenor Square demonstration as well as a 13-day fast at Speaker's Corner.
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Original: John Pilgrim, ' John Rety obituary ' , The Guardian, 18 March 2010 The anthology appeared with his Hearing Eye Press, founded in 1987, which ultimately published over 150 books.
Revised: John Pilgrim, " John Rety obituary ' , The Guardian, 18 March 2010 The anthology appeared with his Hearing Eye Press, founded in 1987, which ultimately published over 150 books.
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Original: John Pilgrim, ' John Rety obituary ' , The Guardian, 18 March 2010 The anthology appeared with his Hearing Eye Press, founded in 1987, which ultimately published over 150 books.
Revised: John Pilgrim, ' John Rety obituary " , The Guardian, 18 March 2010 The anthology appeared with his Hearing Eye Press, founded in 1987, which ultimately published over 150 books.
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Original: John Pilgrim, ' John Rety obituary ' , The Guardian, 18 March 2010 The anthology appeared with his Hearing Eye Press, founded in 1987, which ultimately published over 150 books.
Revised: John Pilgrim, ' John Rety obituary ' , The Guardian, 18 March 2010. The anthology appeared with his Hearing Eye Press, founded in 1987, which ultimately published over 150 books.
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Original:  He also became poetry editor of the Morning Star: an anthology of work which appeared there, Well Versed, went into two editions.
Revised:  He also became poetry editor of the Morning Star: an anthology of work that appeared there, Well Versed, went into two editions.
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Original:  As a chess player, reaching a FIDE rating of 2034,Milan Rai, John Rety: "The point is this", 26 February 2010 he played for Middlesex and London University as well as representing England in the European Senior Chess Championship.
Revised:  As a chess player, reaching a FIDE rating of 2034,Milan Rai, John Rety: "The point is this", 26 February 2010. he played for Middlesex and London University as well as representing England in the European Senior Chess Championship.
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Original: Richard Bagley,  Obituary: John Rety 1930 to 2010  , Morning Star, 26 March 2010 RETY, John.
Revised: Richard Bagley, " Obituary: John Rety 1930 to 2010 , Morning Star, 26 March 2010 RETY, John.
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Original: Richard Bagley,  Obituary: John Rety 1930 to 2010  , Morning Star, 26 March 2010 RETY, John.
Revised: Richard Bagley, Obituary: John Rety 1930 to 2010 " , Morning Star, 26 March 2010 RETY, John.
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Original: Richard Bagley,  Obituary: John Rety 1930 to 2010  , Morning Star, 26 March 2010 RETY, John.
Revised: Richard Bagley, Obituary: John Rety 1930 to 2010 , Morning Star, 26 March 2010. RETY, John.
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Original:  "Notebook in hand, New and Selected Poems" , (Stonewood Press, 2012)  contains a biographical chapter by John Rety's daughter, Emily Johns.
Revised:  "Notebook in hand, New and Selected Poems" (Stonewood Press, 2012) contains a biographical chapter by John Rety's daughter, Emily Johns.
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Original:  "Notebook in hand, New and Selected Poems" , (Stonewood Press, 2012)  contains a biographical chapter by John Rety's daughter, Emily Johns.
Revised:  "Notebook in hand, New and Selected Poems" , (Stonewood Press, 2012) , contains a biographical chapter by John Rety's daughter, Emily Johns.
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Original: After a job translating for a Czech publisher who spoke no English, he started a Soho underground paper, Intimate Review, with contributions from young writers including Doris Lessing, Bill Hopkins, Laura del Rivo, Frank Norman, Alan Owen, Cressida Lindsay and Bernard Kops.
Revised: After a job translating for a Czech publisher who spoke no English, he started a Soho underground paper, Intimate Review, with contributions from young writers including Doris Lessing, Bill Hopkins, Laura del Rivo, Frank Norman, Alun Owen, Cressida Lindsay and Bernard Kops.
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