wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Altaie’ s brother, Hathal Altaie, told McClatchy, “ We’ve been waiting for five years, suffering, not knowing if he’s alive or dead.
Revised:  Hathal Altaie, the man' s brother, Hathal Altaie, told McClatchy, “ We’ve been waiting for five years, suffering, not knowing if he’s alive or dead.
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Original:  Altaie’ s brother, Hathal Altaie, told McClatchy, “ We’ve been waiting for five years, suffering, not knowing if he’s alive or dead.
Revised:  Altaie’ s brother, told , " We’ve been waiting for five years, suffering, not knowing if he’s alive or dead.
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Original:   Helicopters from the US Navy searched for 13 missing persons until Friday morning, when the search was called off.
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Original:  Most who died were dining on the lower deck, and were trapped below.
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Original:  The passengers were mostly foreigners from the Nass-Murray and Roberts construction company, and were enjoying an evening dinner cruise in celebration of their completion of part of the Bahrain World Trade Centre towers.
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Original: Twenty eight human rights activists who had been imprisoned on Wednesday, January 26, 2005 , in relation to their non-legalised protest in the main square of Krakow, Poland, against the presence of Vladimir Putin at the ceremonies for the 60th anniversary of the freeing of the Auschwitz-Birkenau concentration camp , have now been freed from police custody following rapid international solidarity appeals .
Revised: About twenty eight human rights activists who had been imprisoned on Wednesday, January 26, 2005 , in relation to their non-legalised protest in the main square of Krakow, Poland, against the presence of Vladimir Putin at the ceremonies for the 60th anniversary of the freeing of the Auschwitz-Birkenau concentration camp , have now been freed from police custody following rapid international solidarity appeals .
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Original: Twenty eight human rights activists who had been imprisoned on Wednesday, January 26, 2005 , in relation to their non-legalised protest in the main square of Krakow, Poland, against the presence of Vladimir Putin at the ceremonies for the 60th anniversary of the freeing of the Auschwitz-Birkenau concentration camp , have now been freed from police custody following rapid international solidarity appeals .
Revised: Twenty eight human rights activists who had been imprisoned on Wednesday, January 26, 2005 have now mostly been freed from police custody following rapid international solidarity appeals. The activists had been imprisoned in relation to their non-legalised protest in the main square of Krakow, Poland, against the presence of Vladimir Putin at the ceremonies for the 60th anniversary of the freeing of the Auschwitz-Birkenau concentration camp , have now been freed from police custody following rapid international solidarity appeals .
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Original: Twenty eight human rights activists who had been imprisoned on Wednesday, January 26, 2005 , in relation to their non-legalised protest in the main square of Krakow, Poland, against the presence of Vladimir Putin at the ceremonies for the 60th anniversary of the freeing of the Auschwitz-Birkenau concentration camp , have now been freed from police custody following rapid international solidarity appeals .
Revised: Twenty eight human rights activists who had been imprisoned on Wednesday, January 26, 2005 , in relation to their protest in the main square of Krakow, Poland, against the presence of Vladimir Putin at the ceremonies for the 60th anniversary of the freeing of the Auschwitz-Birkenau concentration camp , have now been freed from police custody following rapid international solidarity appeals .
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Original: Twenty eight human rights activists who had been imprisoned on Wednesday, January 26, 2005 , in relation to their non-legalised protest in the main square of Krakow, Poland, against the presence of Vladimir Putin at the ceremonies for the 60th anniversary of the freeing of the Auschwitz-Birkenau concentration camp , have now been freed from police custody following rapid international solidarity appeals .
Revised: Twenty eight human rights activists who had been imprisoned on Wednesday, January 26, 2005 , in relation to their non-legalised protest in the main square of Krakow, Poland, against the presence of Vladimir Putin at the ceremonies for the 60th anniversary of the freeing of the Auschwitz-Birkenau concentration camp .
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Original:  A third person freed by the fire workers survived the accident with serious injuries and was transported to in Kirkwall  
Revised:  A third person freed by the fire workers survived the accident with serious injuries and was transported to in Kirkwall . 
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Original: The have announced that two vehicle occupents, both of which were female adults, have been killed as the result of a road traffic accident in , Scotland.
Revised: The saus two women have been killed as the result of a road traffic accident in , Scotland.
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Original: The have announced that two vehicle occupents, both of which were female adults, have been killed as the result of a road traffic accident in , Scotland.
Revised: The have announced that two vehicle occupents, both of which were female adults, have been killed in a road traffic accident in , Scotland.
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Original: The have announced that two vehicle occupents, both of which were female adults, have been killed as the result of a road traffic accident in , Scotland.
Revised: The have announced that two vehicle occupents, both of which were female adults, have been killed as the result of a road traffic accident on , Scotland.
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Original:  A third person has also experienced serious injuries.
Revised:  A third person was seriously injuries.
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Original:  Of the three individuals which workers had to release from the vehicles involved , two were fatally injured and both were killed at the location of the crash .
Revised:  The had to release from the vehicles involved , two were fatally injured and both were killed at the location of the crash .
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Original:  Of the three individuals which workers had to release from the vehicles involved , two were fatally injured and both were killed at the location of the crash .
Revised:  Of the three individuals which workers had to release three people from the wreckage , two were fatally injured and both were killed at the location of the crash .
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Original:  Of the three individuals which workers had to release from the vehicles involved , two were fatally injured and both were killed at the location of the crash .
Revised:  Of the three individuals which workers had to release from the vehicles involved , two were already dead .
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Original:  A third person freed by the fire workers survived the accident with serious injuries and was transported to in Kirkwall.
Revised:  A third person freed by the rescue workers survived the accident with serious injuries and was transported to in Kirkwall.
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Original:  She has been staing in Liverpool and travelling to w:Blackburn, Straw constituency.
Revised:  She has been staying in Liverpool and travelling to w:Blackburn, Straw constituency.
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Original:  She has been staing in Liverpool and travelling to w:Blackburn, Straw constituency.
Revised:  She has been staing in Liverpool and travelling to w:Blackburn, Mr Straw's constituency.
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Original:  He meeting has been followed by street protests outside her hotel on Hope Street and earlier visti to a Mosque was cancelled after public order fears.
Revised:  Her meeting has been followed by street protests outside her hotel on Hope Street and earlier visti to a Mosque was cancelled after public order fears.
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Original:  He meeting has been followed by street protests outside her hotel on Hope Street and earlier visti to a Mosque was cancelled after public order fears.
Revised:  He meeting has been followed by street protests outside her hotel on Hope Street and earlier visit to a Mosque was cancelled after public order fears.
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Original:  He visit is scheduled to last from 30/3/2006 to 1/4/200
Revised:  Her visit is scheduled to last from 30/3/2006 to 1/4/200
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Original: Condoleezza Rice the United States Secretary of State has been visiting the North West England as a guest of Jack Straw the United Kingdom w: Foreign Secretary.
Revised: Condoleezza Rice the United States Secretary of State has been visiting the North West England as a guest of Jack Straw the United Kingdom Foreign Secretary.
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Original:  She has been staying in Liverpool and travelling to w: Blackburn, Mr Straw's constituency.
Revised:  She has been staying in Liverpool and travelling to Blackburn, Mr Straw's constituency.
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Original: Goode served in the for twenty years as a member of the Democratic Party.
Revised: Goode served in the for twenty-three years as a member of the Democratic Party.
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Original:  He filed paperwork with the (FEC) on February 10, and announced his candidacy to the six days later.
Revised:  Goode filed paperwork with the (FEC) on February 10, and announced his candidacy to the six days later.
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Original:  And in the for several congresses, and that helped with the understanding of the budget and the need that we have to make a serious cut in order to achieve balance.
Revised:  I was on the for several congresses, and that helped with the understanding of the budget and the need that we have to make a serious cut in order to achieve balance.
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Original:  The Constitution National Committee, unlike the and unlike the , is willing to take a stand and support the to counteract illegal immigration.
Revised:  The Constitution National Committee, unlike the and unlike the , was willing to take a stand and support the to counteract illegal immigration.
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Original:  And I would not have adopted the  he approved with all .
Revised:  And I would not have adopted the that he approved with all .
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Original: Goode: I would need more intelligence than I have available to me right now.
Revised: Goode: I would want more intelligence than I have available to me right now.
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Original:  Well he was an American citizen, so do you believe  we should treat American citizens overseas that are considered to be dangerous differently than others?
Revised:  Well he was an American citizen, so do you believe that we should treat American citizens overseas that are considered to be dangerous differently than others?
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Original: Goode''': I’m sure there are instances where they are, but I believe that our Constitutional rights as set forth in the bill of rights and in the amendments to the Constitution need to be preserved and protected  
Revised: Goode''': I’m sure there are instances where they are, but I believe that our Constitutional rights as set forth in the bill of rights and in the amendments to the Constitution need to be preserved and protected . 
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Original: Goode''': I’m sure there are instances where they are, but I believe that our Constitutional rights as set forth in the bill of rights and in the amendments to the Constitution need to be preserved and protected  
Revised: Goode''': I’m sure there are instances where they are, but I believe that our Constitutional rights as set forth in the bill of rights and in the amendments to the Constitution need to be preserved and protected Related new
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Original:  Goode left the Democratic Party before his second re-election campaign in 2000, and ran as an . He joined the Republican Party ahead of the 2002 election, and was re-elected three additional times until his defeat in 2008.
Revised:  Goode left the Democratic Party before his second re-election campaign in 2000, and ran as an . He joined the ahead of the 2002 election, and was re-elected three additional times until his defeat in 2008.
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Original:  Former Congressman of Virginia spoke with Wikinews reporter William S. Saturn about his newly announced 2012 presidential campaign.
Revised:  Former of Virginia spoke with Wikinews reporter William S. Saturn about his newly announced 2012 presidential campaign.
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Original:  Goode is currently seeking the nomination of the , a U.S. . Goode served in the for twenty-three years as a member of the Democratic Party .
Revised:  Goode is currently seeking the nomination of the , a U.S. . Goode served in the for twenty-three years .
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Original:  According to national chairman , Goode is the frontrunner for the  nomination.
Revised:  According to national chairman , Goode is the frontrunner for the party's nomination.
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Original:  And then the U.S. House of Representatives were I served twelve years, I became familiar with the operation of the federal government.
Revised:  And then the U.S. House of Representatives where I served twelve years, I became familiar with the operation of the federal government.
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Original:  He’s gonna vote for Obama - he was - but he says now, he’s gonna vote for me.
Revised:  He’s gonna vote for Obama — he was — but he says now, he’s gonna vote for me.
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Original:  For example, I ’ m from Virginia.
Revised:  For example, I ' m from Virginia.
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Original:  In 1996, he was elected to represent  , and was re-elected two years later.
Revised:  In 1996, he was elected to represent as a , and was re-elected two years later.
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Original:  Elected to congress those first two times as a , Goode left the Democratic Party before his second re-election campaign in 2000, and ran as an . He joined the ahead of the 2002 election, and was re-elected three additional times until his defeat in 2008.
Revised:  Goode left the Democratic Party before his second re-election campaign in 2000, and ran as an . He joined the ahead of the 2002 election, and was re-elected three additional times until his defeat in 2008.
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Original: As a result, eight plants in the U.S. are slated to continue operating.
Revised: Eight plants in the U.S. are slated to continue operating.
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Original:  "He has boots-on-the-ground experience about what the actual conduct of the war in Iraq is . " House said.
Revised:  "He has boots-on-the-ground experience about what the actual conduct of the war in Iraq is , " House said.
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Original: On thursday night, a failure of the Optus B1 satellite affected the Sky Pay TV network and caused a black out of as well other satellite-based systems.
Revised: On Thursday night, a failure of the Optus B1 satellite affected the Sky Pay TV network and caused a black out of as well other satellite-based systems.
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Original: On thursday night, a failure of the Optus B1 satellite affected the Sky Pay TV network and caused a black out of as well other satellite-based systems.
Revised: On thursday night, a failure of the Optus B1 satellite affected the Sky Pay TV network and also caused a blackout of other satellite-based systems.
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Original:  The satellite was down for the time period of thursday evening to friday morning.
Revised:  The satellite was down from Thursday evening to Friday morning.
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Original:  It is also covering international emergency service and air traffic coordination purposes .
Revised:  It also covers international emergency service and air traffic coordination purposes .
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Original:  It is also covering international emergency service and air traffic coordination purposes .
Revised:  It is also covering international emergency service and air traffic coordination .
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Original:  However, thanks to back-up services no serious effects were caused.
Revised:  However, thanks to backup services, no serious effects were caused.
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Original:  Satellite experts and astronomers questioned Sky's explanation that the solar eclipse had hampered attempts to get the service back up and running – the eclipse happened nearly 24 hours before the outagethe satellite should have been in a different area of the sky.
Revised:  Satellite experts and astronomers questioned Sky's explanation that the solar eclipse had hampered attempts to get the service back up and running – the eclipse happened nearly 24 hours before the outage, and thus the satellite should have been in a different area of the sky.
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Original:  The Pay TV comapany is considering paying compensations to advertising customers as well.
Revised:  The Pay TV comapany is considering paying compensation to advertising customers as well.
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Original: At first, tides and winds took the sewage spill out to sea, but southerly winds sent the sewage back toward Waikiki Beach, forcing city officials to warn oceangoers against swimming . Signs were posted on beaches on the west side of Waikiki.
Revised: At first, tides and winds took the sewage spill out to sea, but southerly winds sent the sewage back toward Waikiki Beach, forcing city officials to take action . Signs were posted on beaches on the west side of Waikiki.
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Original: More than 48 million gallons of untreated sewage that has flowed into the ocean from a sewer spill on Friday, March 24, has forced Honolulu city officials to post signs warning tourists on Waikiki Beach to stay out of the water.
Revised: More than 48 million gallons of untreated sewage that flowed into the ocean from a sewer spill on Friday, March 24, has forced Honolulu city officials to post signs warning tourists on Waikiki Beach to stay out of the water.
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Original:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay and Auckland City Council will now spend $100,000 ,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 removing the top 50cm of soil at the playcentre, landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
Revised:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay and Auckland City Council will now spend $100,000 removing the top 50cm of soil at the playcentre, landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
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Original:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay  and Auckland City Council will now spend $100,000 removing the top 50 cm (~20 in) of soil at the playcentre, landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
Revised:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay , and Auckland City Council will now spend $100,000 removing the top 50 cm (~20 in) of soil at the playcentre, landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
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Original:  At the school playground were " polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons, including benzo-a-pyrene" suspected and confirmed by a chemical analysis on Tuesday.
Revised:  The presence of " polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons, including benzo-a-pyrene" suspected and confirmed by a chemical analysis on Tuesday.
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Original:  At the school playground were " polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons, including benzo-a-pyrene" suspected and confirmed by a chemical analysis on Tuesday.
Revised:  At the school playground were " Polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons, including benzo-a-pyrene" suspected and confirmed by a chemical analysis on Tuesday.
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Original:  At the school playground were " polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons, including benzo-a-pyrene" suspected and confirmed by a chemical analysis on Tuesday.
Revised:  At the school playground were " polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons, including benzo-a-pyrene" was suspected at the school playground and was confirmed by a chemical analysis on Tuesday.
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Original:  The chemicals are considered to be toxic , they may cause digestive and respiratory diseases as well as eye problems.
Revised:  The chemicals are considered to be toxic ; they may temporarily cause digestive and respiratory diseases as well as eye problems.
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Original:  The chemicals are considered to be toxic , they may cause digestive and respiratory diseases as well as eye problems.
Revised:  The chemicals are considered to be toxic , they may cause digestive and respiratory distress, as well as eye problems.
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Original:  The found levels of benzo-a-pyrene  were between 0.06 and 4.82 milligrams per kilogram of soil at surface level, according to the Ministry of Education , a potential risk is present at levels above 3.5 mg
Revised:  The found levels of benzo-a-pyrene found were between 0.06 and 4.82 milligrams per kilogram of soil at surface level, according to the Ministry of Education , a potential risk is present at levels above 3.5 mg
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Original:  The found levels of benzo-a-pyrene  were between 0.06 and 4.82 milligrams per kilogram of soil at surface level, according to the Ministry of Education , a potential risk is present at levels above 3.5 mg
Revised:  The found levels of benzo-a-pyrene were between 0.06 and 4.82 milligrams per kilogram of soil at surface level, according to the Ministry of Education . A potential risk is present at levels above 3.5 mg
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Original:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay, and Auckland City Council will now spend $100,000 removing the top 50 cm (~20 in) of soil at the playcentre,  landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
Revised:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay, and Auckland City Council will now spend $100,000 removing the top 50 cm (~20 in) of soil at the playcentre, doing landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
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Original:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay, and Auckland City Council will now spend $100,000 removing the top 50 cm (~20 in) of soil at the playcentre, doing landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
Revised:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay, and the Council will now spend $100,000 removing the top 50 cm (~20 in) of soil at the playcentre, doing landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
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Original: A chemical which Auckland City Council said is a suspected cause of cancer and is considered toxic has been found in soil at a children's playcentre in Auckland.
Revised: Chemicals which Auckland City Council said is a suspected cause of cancer and is considered toxic has been found in soil at a children's playcentre in Auckland.
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Original: A chemical which Auckland City Council said is a suspected cause of cancer and is considered toxic has been found in soil at a children's playcentre in Auckland.
Revised: A chemical which Auckland City Council said are a suspected cause of cancer and is considered toxic has been found in soil at a children's playcentre in Auckland.
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Original: A chemical which Auckland City Council said is a suspected cause of cancer and is considered toxic has been found in soil at a children's playcentre in Auckland.
Revised: A chemical which Auckland City Council said is a suspected cause of cancer and are considered toxic have been found in soil at a children's playcentre in Auckland.
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Original:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay, and the Council will now spend $100,000 removing the top 50 cm ( ~ 20 in) of soil at the playcentre, doing landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
Revised:  The contamination was found at the Auckland Central Playcentre in Freeman's Bay, and the Council will now spend $100,000 removing the top 50 cm ( about 20 in) of soil at the playcentre, doing landscaping and replacing playground equipment.
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