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Original:  Lots of people have their own opinions and thoughts but the fact of the matter is that I'm very disappointed not to do what I was looking to do." . Well known as a perfectionist, the disappointment of not being able to stand in for the injured Felipe Massa will have been difficult to accept for the seven-times World Champion, and so a possible return cannot be ruled out.
Revised:  Lots of people have their own opinions and thoughts but the fact of the matter is that I'm very disappointed not to do what I was looking to do." 
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Original:  ]  Should the rumours prove to be correct, an extremely interesting combination could be on the cards.
Revised: " ] Should the rumours prove to be correct, an extremely interesting combination could be on the cards.
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Original:  Family spokesman Ken Sunshine has said that the date for the burial of the King of Pop would be pushed back to September 3. No reason has been given for the change of arrangements  . Ken Sunshine has also said that the inferring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles,  will be private and only close friends and family will be invited to see the ceremony.
Revised:  Family spokesman Ken Sunshine has said that the date for the burial of the King of Pop would be pushed back to September 3. The reason for the change of arrangements . Ken Sunshine has also said that the inferring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles, will be private and only close friends and family will be invited to see the ceremony.
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Original:  Family spokesman Ken Sunshine has said that the date for the burial of the King of Pop would be pushed back to September 3. No reason has been given for the change of arrangements  . Ken Sunshine has also said that the inferring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles,  will be private and only close friends and family will be invited to see the ceremony.
Revised:  Family spokesman Ken Sunshine has said that the date for the burial of the King of Pop would be pushed back to September 3. No reason has been given for the change of arrangements . Ken Sunshine has also said that the inferring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles, and will be private and only close friends and family will be invited to see the ceremony.
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Original:  Family spokesman Ken Sunshine has said that the date for the burial of the King of Pop would be pushed back to September 3. No reason has been given for the change of arrangements  . Ken Sunshine has also said that the inferring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles,  will be private and only close friends and family will be invited to see the ceremony.
Revised:  Family spokesman Ken Sunshine has said that the date for the burial of the King of Pop would be pushed back to September 3. No reason has been given for the change of arrangements . Ken Sunshine has also said that the inferring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles, will be private with only close friends and family will be invited to see the ceremony.
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Original:  Family spokesman Ken Sunshine has said that the date for the burial of the King of Pop would be pushed back to September 3. No reason has been given for the change of arrangements  . Ken Sunshine has also said that the inferring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles,  will be private and only close friends and family will be invited to see the ceremony.
Revised:  Family spokesman Ken Sunshine has said that the date for the burial of the King of Pop would be pushed back to September 3. No reason has been given for the change of arrangements . Ken Sunshine has also said that the inferring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles, will be private and only close friends and family being invited to see the ceremony.
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Original:  The family are currently trying to keep his burial location unknown  
Revised:  The family are currently trying to keep his burial location unknown . 
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Original: Ken Sunshine has also said that the inferring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles, and will be private with only close friends and family being invited to see the ceremony.
Revised: Ken Sunshine has also said that the interring that will take place in the Forest Lawn Memorial in Glendale, Los Angeles, and will be private with only close friends and family being invited to see the ceremony.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Michael Jackson's family has confirmed that the funeral of Michael Jackson will be postponed from what would have been his 51st birthday—August 29.
Revised: Michael Jackson A spokesperson for Michael Jackson's family has confirmed that the funeral of Michael Jackson will be postponed from what would have been his 51st birthday—August 29.
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Original:  The family are currently trying to keep his burial location unknown . Related New
Revised:  The family are currently trying to keep his burial location unknown Related New
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Original:  The family are currently trying to keep his burial location unknown . Related New
Revised:  The family are currently trying to keep his burial location unknown . 
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Original:  "They provoked us by coming into our areas, so we have a right to attack them in their bases," al-Shabab spokesman Sheik Ali Mohamud Rage said.
Revised:  "They provoked us by coming into our areas, so we have a right to attack them in their bases," al-Shabaab spokesman Sheik Ali Mohamud Rage said.
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Original: At least 22 people were killed following violence between the Somali government and  Islamist rebels in Mogadishu over the past two days.
Revised: At least 22 people were killed as Somali government and Islamist rebels in Mogadishu over the past two days.
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Original:  The attacks started when the insurgent group al-Shabaab | , who is trying to overthrow the government, started firing mortar bombs in the capital on Friday.
Revised:  The attacks started when the insurgent group al-Shabaab , who is trying to overthrow the government, started firing mortar bombs in the capital on Friday.
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Original:  AST August 21 (0300 UTC August 22), Hurricane Bill was located within 10 nautical miles of 31.0°N 67.5°W, or about 545 miles (880 km) east-southeast of Cape Hatteras, North Carolina.
Revised:  AST August 21 (0300 UTC August 22), Hurricane Bill was located within 10 nautical miles of 31.0°N 67.5°W, or about 545 mi (880 km) east-southeast of Cape Hatteras, North Carolina.
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Original:  Forecasters estimate the storm's minimum barometric pressure to be around 957 millibars   
Revised:  Forecasters estimate the storm's minimum barometric pressure to be around 957 millibars . 
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Original: Though the brunt of the storm should rename offshore, residents in w: New England are monitoring Bill's progress.
Revised: Though the brunt of the storm should remain offshore, residents in w: New England are monitoring Bill's progress.
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Original: Though the brunt of the storm should rename offshore, residents in w: New England are monitoring Bill's progress.
Revised: Though the brunt of the storm should rename offshore, residents in New England are monitoring Bill's progress.
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Original:  According to Steve Kass of the Rhode Island Emergency Management Agency, "If you own a boat and you like to go out any distance, this is not the weekend to do it"   
Revised:  According to Steve Kass of the Rhode Island Emergency Management Agency, "If you own a boat and you like to go out any distance, this is not the weekend to do it" . 
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Original:  On its predicted path, Bill will likely disrupt the Obama family's vacation to Martha's Vineyard   
Revised:  On its predicted path, Bill will likely disrupt the Obama family's vacation to Martha's Vineyard . 
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Original:  Nova Scotia eastern shore and southeastern portions of Newfoundland appear to be at greatest risk.
Revised:  The eastern shore of Nova Scotia and southeastern portions of Newfoundland appear to be at greatest risk.
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Original:  He was 82 
Revised:  He was 82. 
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Original:  Current Prime Minister Stephen Harper called Gray "an honourable parliamentarian who served his country well"  
Revised:  Current Prime Minister Stephen Harper called Gray "an honourable parliamentarian who served his country well" . 
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Original: James Moore , current Minister for Industry, tweeted about the "marvel" of Gray "swatting away our questions [...] when we were in opposition."
Revised:  , current Minister for Industry, tweeted about the "marvel" of Gray "swatting away our questions [...] when we were in opposition."
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Original:  Despite the state of emergency being called, no casualties have yet been reported as a result of the fires.
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Original:  He urged residents of the towns threatened by the fires to evacuate   .
Revised:  He urged residents of the towns threatened by the fires to evacuate . .
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Original:  Brazilian lead the race after a McLaren team delay on the second pit-stop of Lewis Hamilton, when they changed tyres to different one as required by Formula One sporting regulations       .
Revised:  Brazilian lead the race after a McLaren team delay on the second pit-stop of Lewis Hamilton, when they changed tyres to different one as required by Formula One sporting regulations . Hamilton finished on the back of "Rubinho". .
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Original:  Leo Obstbaum designed both of the mascots as well as the medals for next years games.
Revised:  He designed both of the mascots as well as the medals for next years games.
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Original:  VANOC spokeswoman Renee Smith-Valade released a statement threw e-mail saying "Leo's passing is a deep loss to the VANOC team and the entire organization's thoughts and prayers are with the Obstbaum family".
Revised:  VANOC spokeswoman Renee Smith-Valade released a statement through e-mail saying "Leo's passing is a deep loss to the VANOC team and the entire organization's thoughts and prayers are with the Obstbaum family".
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Original: While Chief Executive John Furlong said "Leo is everywhere you look, in every colour, every texture, in every little bit of Vancouver 2010, " Leo led and influenced the design of some of the most iconic pieces of the 2010 Winter Games.
Revised:  Chief Executive John Furlong said "Leo is everywhere you look, in every colour, every texture, in every little bit of Vancouver 2010, " Leo led and influenced the design of some of the most iconic pieces of the 2010 Winter Games.
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Original: While Chief Executive John Furlong said "Leo is everywhere you look, in every colour, every texture, in every little bit of Vancouver 2010, " Leo led and influenced the design of some of the most iconic pieces of the 2010 Winter Games.
Revised: While Chief Executive John Furlong said "Leo is everywhere you look, in every colour, every texture, in every little bit of Vancouver 2010. Leo led and influenced the design of some of the most iconic pieces of the 2010 Winter Games.
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Original:  His spirit and daring inspiration has touched absolutely everything and because of him memories of the Games will live on for generations, a true enduring legacy of what went on here in Vancouver." Born he Argentina, he later moved to Spain as a child until moving to Vancouver in 2005.
Revised:  His spirit and daring inspiration has touched absolutely everything and because of him memories of the Games will live on for generations, a true enduring legacy of what went on here in Vancouver." Born in Argentina, he later moved to Spain as a child until moving to Vancouver in 2005.
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Original:  The election's results are not expected to come in until next month
Revised:  Election results are not expected to come in until next month
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Original:  According to the country's election system, the president must win at least fifty percent of the popular vote to avoid a run-off election.
Revised:  According to the country's election system, a candidate must win at least fifty percent of the popular vote to avoid a run-off election.
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Original:  Spokesman Whaeed Omar said that “ they [Abdullah's team] have been saying things about fraud even before the elections took place.
Revised:  Spokesman Whaeed Omar said that " they [Abdullah's team] have been saying things about fraud even before the elections took place.
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Original:  ” He added that the president's team had lodged its own complaints with the election complaints commission.
Revised:  " He added that the president's team had lodged its own complaints with the election complaints commission.
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Original:  Hemp goods were advertised and on sale at the event, and some attendees drank cannabis-themed .
Revised:  Hemp goods were advertised and on sale at the event, and some attendees were seen drinking cannabis-themed .
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Original:  The elimination of Saddam Hussien was a necessary step to build, "institutions of a free society, a society based on freedom of speech, freedom of assembly, cocknballs freedom of religion, and equal cocnkballedry justice under law."
Revised:  The elimination of Saddam Hussien was a necessary step to build, "institutions of a free society, a society based on freedom of speech, freedom of assembly, freedom of religion, and equal cocnkballedry justice under law."
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Original:  The elimination of Saddam Hussien was a necessary step to build, "institutions of a free society, a society based on freedom of speech, freedom of assembly, cocknballs freedom of religion, and equal cocnkballedry justice under law."
Revised:  The elimination of Saddam Hussien was a necessary step to build, "institutions of a free society, a society based on freedom of speech, freedom of assembly, cocknballs freedom of religion, and equal justice under law."
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Original:  The RCMP are still trying to determine how long he was at the Thunderbird Motel before he hanged himself.
Revised:  Police are still trying to determine how long he was at the Thunderbird Motel before he hanged himself.
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Original: Ryan Jenkins is from Calgary and moved to Los Angeles after appearing in a reality television show on the VH1 network,  Megan Wants a Millionaire .
Revised: Ryan Jenkins is from Calgary and moved to Los Angeles after appearing in a reality television show on the VH1 network, " Megan Wants a Millionaire .
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Original: The RCMP are now looking for an unidentified women who helped Jenkins check himself into the motel last Thursday.
Revised: The RCMP are now looking for an unidentified woman who helped Jenkins check himself into the motel last Thursday.
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Original: England have beaten Australia to win the 2009 Ashes series having won the fifth test by 197 runs at the Oval.
Revised: England has beaten Australia to win the 2009 Ashes series having won the fifth test by 197 runs at the Oval.
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Original:  Australia will next have the oppotunity to regain the Ashes in 2011 in Australia
Revised:  Australia will next have the opportunity to regain the Ashes in 2011 in Australia
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Original:  Both firefighters had earlier went missing after a portion of the building collapsed.
Revised:  Both firefighters had earlier gone missing after a portion of the building collapsed.
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Original:  The building houses a storefront on the main floor, and apartments on the second.
Revised:  The building housed a deli on the main floor, and apartments on the second.
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Original:  It is not known if any residents were inside when the fire started 
Revised:  It is not known if any residents were inside when the fire started . The cause of the fire is still under investigation
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Original:  Prior to the vote, calling Harper a . Joe Comuzzi announced his resignation from the Liberal cabinet because of his opposition to gay weddings and the fact that Liberal cabinet members were required to vote the party line in this case.
Revised:  Prior to the vote, Joe Comuzzi announced his resignation from the Liberal cabinet because of his opposition to gay weddings and the fact that Liberal cabinet members were required to vote the party line in this case.
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Original:  If the Senate passes Bill C-38 and the Governor General gives royal assent, Canada would become the fourth country in the world to legalize same-sex weddings after the Netherlands, Belgium and Spain.
Revised:  Assuming the Senate passes Bill C-38 and the Governor General gives royal assent, Canada would become the fourth country in the world to legalize same-sex weddings after the Netherlands, Belgium and Spain.
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Original:  If the Senate passes Bill C-38 and the Governor General gives royal assent, Canada would become the fourth country in the world to legalize same-sex weddings after the Netherlands, Belgium and Spain.
Revised:  If the Senate passes Bill C-38 and the Governor General gives royal assent, Canada will become the fourth country in the world to legalize same-sex weddings after the Netherlands, Belgium and Spain.
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Original:  + Votes in House of Commons on Bill C-38GroupForAgainstAbsenteesTotalLiberal cabinet360137Liberal backbench5932395Conservatives393298Bloc Québécois435654NDP171119Independents0224Totals15813316307 While this vote is historic, gay weddings had already been legalized by the Supreme Courts of several Canadian provinces.
Revised:  + Votes in House of Commons on Bill C-38GroupForAgainstAbsenteesTotalLiberal cabinet360137Liberal backbench5932395Conservatives393298Bloc Québécois435654NDP171119Independents0224Totals15813316307 While this vote is historic, gay weddings had already been legalized by the Supreme Courts of most Canadian provinces.
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Original:   The Modern Library ranked Foote's The Civil War: A Narrative as number 15 on its list of 100 best non-fiction books.
Revised:  <p> The Modern Library ranked Foote's The Civil War: A Narrative as number 15 on its list of 100 best non-fiction books.
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Original:   Foote was commisioned a captain in the United States Army during World War II and lost his commission after visiting a female friend in an army vehicle without permission.
Revised:  <p> Foote was commisioned a captain in the United States Army during World War II and lost his commission after visiting a female friend in an army vehicle without permission.
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Original:   Following the war he was briefly a reporter for the Associated Press.
Revised:  <p> Following the war he was briefly a reporter for the Associated Press.
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Original:   Pulitzer Prize winning author and friend, Richard Ford said of Foote, "He was a Southerner of great intellect who took up the issue of the Civil War as a writer with huge sanity and sympathy.
Revised:  <p> Pulitzer Prize winning author and friend, Richard Ford said of Foote, "He was a Southerner of great intellect who took up the issue of the Civil War as a writer with huge sanity and sympathy.
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Original: On the day of his death, Murray said, he injected Jackson with lorazepam, then administered midazolamsince amongst other drugs.
Revised: On the day of his death, Murray said, he injected Jackson with lorazepam, then administered midazolam amongst other drugs.
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Original:  It has been revealed that Jackson was probably killed by an overdose of propofol and his doctor, Conrad Murray, is under investigation for manslaughter.
Revised:  It has been revealed that Jackson was probably killed by an overdose of propofol . His doctor, Conrad Murray, is under investigation for manslaughter.
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Original: Michael Jackson  Michael Jackson was the victim of a homicide , the Los Angeles County Coroner has concluded  .
Revised: Michael Jackson Michael Jackson was the victim of a homicide . The Los Angeles County Coroner has concluded .
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Original:  It has been revealed that Jackson was probably killed by an overdose of propofol and his doctor, Conrad Murray, is under investigation for manslaughter.
Revised:  It has been revealed that Jackson was probably killed by an overdose of propofol , His doctor, Conrad Murray, is under investigation for manslaughter.
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Original:  Harris hopes to get to number 1 in the UK Singles Chart with the latter , achieving this on next Sunday's Chart Show on BBC Radio 1, the very same place where the information about Michael Jackson's album emerged .
Revised:  Harris hopes to get to number 1 in the UK Singles Chart with the latter .
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Original: On July 5 2009, Michael Jackson's 2005 compilation album The Essential went to number 1 in the UK Album Chart, following a sudden rise in his records after his death.
Revised: On July 5 2009, Michael Jackson's 2005 compilation album The Essential went to number 1 in the UK Album Chart, following a sudden rise in his record sales after his death.
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Original:  The album has produced such great hits as  I'm Not Alone and Ready for the Weekend  . Harris hopes to get to number 1 in the UK Singles Chart with the latter.
Revised:  The album has produced such great hits as " I'm Not Alone and Ready for the Weekend . Harris hopes to get to number 1 in the UK Singles Chart with the latter.
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Original:  The album has produced such great hits as  I'm Not Alone and Ready for the Weekend  . Harris hopes to get to number 1 in the UK Singles Chart with the latter.
Revised:  The album has produced such great hits as I'm Not Alone " and " Ready for the Weekend . Harris hopes to get to number 1 in the UK Singles Chart with the latter.
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Original:  The album has produced such great hits as  I'm Not Alone and Ready for the Weekend  . Harris hopes to get to number 1 in the UK Singles Chart with the latter.
Revised:  The album has produced such great hits as I'm Not Alone and Ready for the Weekend " . Harris hopes to get to number 1 in the UK Singles Chart with the latter.
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Original: Finally, after a seven week run at the top of the album chart, the compilation, which contains some of Michael Jackson's greatest hits, finally fell five places to number 6.
Revised: Finally, after a seven week run at the top of the album chart, the compilation, which contains a selection of Michael Jackson's greatest hits, finally fell five places to number 6.
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Original: Finally, after a seven week run at the top of the album chart, the compilation, which contains some of Michael Jackson's greatest hits, finally fell five places to number 6.
Revised: Finally, after a seven week run at the top of the album chart, the compilation, which contains some of Michael Jackson's hits, finally fell five places to number 6.
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Original:  The album has produced such great hits as "I'm Not Alone" and "Ready for the Weekend".
Revised:  The album contains a selection of tracks, such as "I'm Not Alone" and "Ready for the Weekend".
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Original: 5-day forecast track map of Ignacio The National Hurricane Center  has upgraded Tropical Depression Twelve-E to tropical storm status.
Revised: 5-day forecast track map of Ignacio The National Hurricane Center (NHC) has upgraded Tropical Depression Twelve-E to tropical storm status.
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