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Original:  According to the Athens coroner Philippos Koutsaftis , Sergianopoulos, 56, had been stabbed 21 times in  neck, lungs and chest, while the door had been violated.
Revised:  According to the Athens coroner Philippos Koutsaftis , Sergianopoulos, 56, had been stabbed 21 times in neck, lungs and chest, and the door had been violated.
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Original:  Reports from Greek television news made  known that the knife, with which the actor was stabbed, was found in the kitchen with blood on in.
Revised:  Reports from Greek television news made it known that the knife, with which the actor was stabbed, was found in the kitchen with blood on in.
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Original:  Contrary to the first assumptions, Police now believes that it was not a premeditated murder and that  murderer was not a close friend of Sergianopoulos.
Revised:  Contrary to first assumptions, Police now believes that it was not a premeditated murder and that murderer was not a close friend of Sergianopoulos.
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Original:  Contrary to the first assumptions, Police now believes that it was not a premeditated murder and that  murderer was not a close friend of Sergianopoulos.
Revised:  Contrary to the first assumptions, police now believe that it was not a premeditated murder and that murderer was not a close friend of Sergianopoulos.
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Original:  Contrary to the first assumptions, Police now believes that it was not a premeditated murder and that  murderer was not a close friend of Sergianopoulos.
Revised:  Contrary to the first assumptions, Police now believes that it was not a premeditated murder and that the murderer was not a close friend of Sergianopoulos.
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Original:  Among the findings in the apartment there were a fingerprint on the door inside the flat, as well as drug substances (probably coccaine ) and 40 more fingerprints which will be analyzed in special laboratories.
Revised:  Among the findings in the apartment were a fingerprint on the door inside the flat, as well as drug substances (probably coccaine ) and 40 more fingerprints which will be analyzed in special laboratories.
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Original:  Among the findings in the apartment there were a fingerprint on the door inside the flat, as well as drug substances (probably coccaine ) and 40 more fingerprints which will be analyzed in special laboratories.
Revised:  Among the findings in the apartment there were a fingerprint on the door inside the flat, drug substances (probably coccaine ) and 40 more fingerprints which will be analyzed in special laboratories.
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Original:  Among the findings in the apartment there were a fingerprint on the door inside the flat, as well as drug substances (probably coccaine ) and 40 more fingerprints which will be analyzed in special laboratories.
Revised:  Among the findings in the apartment there were a fingerprint on the door inside the flat, as well as drug substances (probably cocaine ) and 40 more fingerprints which will be analyzed in special laboratories.
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Original:  It must be noted that the actor had been arrested a few months before for drug possession in  Kolonos area of Athens in December 2007.
Revised:  The actor had been arrested a few months before for drug possession in Kolonos area of Athens in December 2007.
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Original:  It must be noted that the actor had been arrested a few months before for drug possession in  Kolonos area of Athens in December 2007.
Revised:  It must be noted that the actor had been arrested for drug possession in Kolonos area of Athens in December 2007.
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Original:  It must be noted that the actor had been arrested a few months before for drug possession in  Kolonos area of Athens in December 2007.
Revised:  It must be noted that the actor had been arrested a few months before for drug possession in the Kolonos area of Athens in December 2007.
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Original:  The body of Sergianopoulos  moved to his hometown in Drama, northern Greece, where his funeral took place earlier today in the presence of co-actors and hundreds of local people
Revised:  The body of Sergianopoulos has been moved to his hometown in Drama, northern Greece, where his funeral took place earlier today in the presence of co-actors and hundreds of local people
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Original:  The body of Sergianopoulos  moved to his hometown in Drama, northern Greece, where his funeral took place earlier today in the presence of co-actors and hundreds of local people
Revised:  The body of Sergianopoulos moved to his hometown in Drama, northern Greece, where his funeral took place earlier today in the presence of co-actors and hundreds of locals
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Original: Image:Sergianopulos.jpg|Actor Nikos Sergianopoulos, 56, was stabbed to death in his Athens apartment.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The actor had been arrested for drug possession in the Kolonos area of Athens in December 2007.
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Original:  The body of Sergianopoulos has been moved to his hometown in Drama, northern Greece, where his funeral took place earlier today in the presence of co-actors and hundreds of locals
Revised:  REDIRECT Greek police investigate murder of act
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Original:  Athens coroner Philippos Koutsaftis stated that Sergianopoulos, 56, had been stabbed 21 times in the neck, lungs and chest, and the door had been violated . Reports from Greek television news made it known that the knife, with which the actor was stabbed, was found in the kitchen with blood on it.
Revised:  Athens coroner Philippos Koutsaftis stated that Sergianopoulos, 56, had been stabbed 21 times in the neck, lungs and chest, and the door had been forced . Reports from Greek television news made it known that the knife, with which the actor was stabbed, was found in the kitchen with blood on it.
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Original: Five scuba divers missing near IndonesiaFive European scuba divers remain missing, after being swept away by a large current of the coast of Indonesia .
Revised: Five scuba divers missing near Indonesia Five European scuba divers remain missing, after being swept away by a large current of the coast of Indonesia .
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Original: Five scuba divers missing near Indonesia Five European scuba divers remain missing , after being swept away by a large current of the coast of Indonesia.
Revised: Five scuba divers missing near Indonesia Five European scuba divers remain missing after being swept away by a large current of the coast of Indonesia.
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Original: Five scuba divers missing near Indonesia Five European scuba divers remain missing , after being swept away by a large current of the coast of Indonesia.
Revised: Five scuba divers missing near Indonesia Five European scuba divers remain missing , after being swept away by a large current off the coast of Indonesia.
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Original:  The divers were from the UK, France and Sweden.
Revised:  The divers are from the UK, France and Sweden.
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Original:  The divers were last seen in Komodo National Park, in an area where the coast is known for being quite dangerous.
Revised:  The divers were last seen in Komodo National Park, in an area known for being quite dangerous.
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Original:  The navy has also come to search the area
Revised:  The navy has also joined in to search the area
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Original:  They have currently been missing for over a day .
Revised:  They have been missing for over a day .
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Original:  The navy has also joined in to search the area
Revised:  The navy has also joined the search
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Original:  The US, on the other hand, estimates that figure to be closer to just 3\%.
Revised:  The United States estimates that figure to be closer to just 3\%.
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Original:  Argentina noted that subsidies granted to farmers from the US, the EU and other Western countries have also been a major player in the increase
Revised:  Argentina noted that subsidies granted to farmers from the US, the European Union and other Western countries have also been a major player in the increase
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Original:  These territories should be able to choose whether to be independent states as "equal and sovereign partners" of the United States, or remain integrated within the United States .
Revised:  These territories should be able to choose whether to be independent states as "equal and sovereign partners" of the United States, or remain integrated within the United States 
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Original:  The legislature of American Samoa, called the Fono, has approved a Future Political Status Commission to study public opinion on possibly becoming a commonwealth or freely associated state
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Original:  200px |none |American Samoan Governor Togiola T.A. Tulafono
Revised:  200px |American Samoan Governor Togiola T.A. Tulafono
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Original:  These territories should be able to choose whether to be independent states as "equal and sovereign partners" of the United States, or remain integrated within the United States  
Revised:  These territories should be able to choose whether to be independent states as "equal and sovereign partners" of the United States, or remain integrated within the United States . 
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Original:  The final report into the crash of a B-2 Spirit bomber belonging to the United States Air Force  in Guam has determined the crash was caused by moisture on sensor causing the jet to receive inaccurate data.
Revised:  The final report into the crash of a B-2 Spirit bomber belonging to the United States Air Force (USAF) in Guam has determined the crash was caused by moisture on sensor causing the jet to receive inaccurate data.
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Original:  It was the first loss of a B-2, which costs US$1.4 billion   
Revised:  It was the first loss of a B-2, which costs US$1.4 billion . 
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Original:  Major Ryan Link and Captain Justin Grieve, who were piloting, ejected as the left wingtip struck the ground and were injured, with Grieve suffering compression fracrtures to his spine, but survived.
Revised:  Major Ryan Link and Captain Justin Grieve, who were piloting, ejected as the left wingtip struck the ground and were injured, with Grieve suffering compression fractures to his spine, but survived.
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Original:  The wreckage came to rest to the runway's left   
Revised:  The wreckage came to rest to the runway's left . 
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Original: A file photo of a B-2 Spirit bomber The final report into the crash of a B-2 Spirit bomber belonging to the United States Air Force (USAF) in Guam has determined  the crash was caused by moisture on sensor causing the jet to receive inaccurate data.
Revised: A file photo of a B-2 Spirit bomber The final report into the crash of a B-2 Spirit bomber belonging to the United States Air Force (USAF) in Guam has determined that the crash was caused by moisture on sensor causing the jet to receive inaccurate data.
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Original: A file photo of a B-2 Spirit bomber The final report into the crash of a B-2 Spirit bomber belonging to the United States Air Force (USAF) in Guam has determined  the crash was caused by moisture on sensor causing the jet to receive inaccurate data.
Revised: A file photo of a B-2 Spirit bomber The final report into the crash of a B-2 Spirit bomber belonging to the United States Air Force (USAF) in Guam has determined the crash was caused by moisture on sensors causing the jet to receive inaccurate data.
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Original:  The aircraft, which belonged to USAF's 509th Air Wing and carried the name Spirit of Kansas, was attempting takeoff from Andersen Air Force Base on February 23 this year when the crash occured.
Revised:  The aircraft, belonging to USAF's 509th Air Wing and carried the name Spirit of Kansas, was attempting takeoff from Andersen Air Force Base on February 23 this year when the crash occured.
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Original:  The aircraft, which belonged to USAF's 509th Air Wing and carried the name Spirit of Kansas, was attempting takeoff from Andersen Air Force Base on February 23 this year when the crash occured.
Revised:  The aircraft, which belonged to USAF's 509th Air Wing and carrying the name Spirit of Kansas, was attempting takeoff from Andersen Air Force Base on February 23 this year when the crash occured.
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Original:  The aircraft believed it had reached the takeoff speed of 140 knots when in reality it was travelling ten knots slower and rotated for takeoff.
Revised:  The aircraft crew believed the bomber had reached the takeoff speed of 140 knots when in reality it was travelling ten knots slower and rotated for takeoff.
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Original:  The aircraft believed it had reached the takeoff speed of 140 knots when in reality it was travelling ten knots slower and rotated for takeoff.
Revised:  The aircraft believed it had reached the takeoff speed of 140 knots when in reality it was traveling ten knots slower and rotated for takeoff.
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Original:  The sensor problems also meant the plane wrongly thought it was in a nose down attitude , causing it to command a high level of pitch, around 30 degrees.
Revised:  The misfunction also meant that the sensors showed the plane to be in a nose down attitude , causing it to command a high level of pitch, around 30 degrees.
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Original:  The sensor problems also meant the plane wrongly thought it was in a nose down attitude , causing it to command a high level of pitch, around 30 degrees.
Revised:  The sensor problems also meant the plane wrongly thought it was in a nose down position , causing it to command a high level of pitch, around 30 degrees.
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Original:  This, cobined with the low takeoff speed, caused the aircraft to stall and veer to the left.
Revised:  This, combined with the low takeoff speed, caused the aircraft to stall and veer to the left.
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Original:  Major Ryan Link and Captain Justin Grieve, who were piloting, ejected as the left wingtip struck the ground and were injured, with Grieve suffering compression fractures to his spine, but survived .
Revised:  Major Ryan Link and Captain Justin Grieve, who were piloting, ejected as the left wingtip struck the ground . They were injured, with Grieve suffering compression fractures to his spine, but survived .
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Original:  Major Ryan Link and Captain Justin Grieve, who were piloting, ejected as the left wingtip struck the ground and were injured, with Grieve suffering compression fractures to his spine, but survived .
Revised:  Major Ryan Link and Captain Justin Grieve, who were piloting, ejected as the left wingtip struck the ground and were injured, with Grieve suffering compression fractures to his spine, but surviving .
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Original:  They were also unaware that earlier another B-2's takeoff roll was aborted at 70 knots at the same base due to abnormal indications.
Revised:  They were also unaware that , at an earlier time at the same base, another B-2's takeoff roll was aborted at 70 knots at the same base due to abnormal indications.
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Original:  They were also unaware that earlier another B-2's takeoff roll was aborted at 70 knots at the same base due to abnormal indications.
Revised:  They were also unaware that earlier another B-2's takeoff roll was aborted at 70 knots due to abnormal indications.
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Original:  After inspection by maintenance personnel  it was determined that moisture in the sensor system was to blame and after turning on the pitot heat the aircraft took off without incident
Revised:  After inspection by maintenance personnel , it was determined that moisture in the sensor system was to blame and after turning on the pitot heat the aircraft took off without incident
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Original:  After inspection by maintenance personnel  it was determined that moisture in the sensor system was to blame and after turning on the pitot heat the aircraft took off without incident
Revised:  After inspection by maintenance personnel it was determined that moisture in the sensor system was to blame . After turning on the pitot heat the aircraft took off without incident
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Original:  After turning on the pitot heat the aircraft took off without incident  
Revised:  After turning on the pitot heat the aircraft took off without incident . 
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Original: A file photo of a B-2 Spirit bomber The final report into the crash of a B-2 Spirit bomber belonging to the United States Air Force (USAF) in Guam has determined that the crash was caused by moisture on sensors causing the jet to receive inaccurate data.
Revised: A file photo of a B-2 Spirit bomber The final report into the crash of a B-2 Spirit bomber belonging to the United States Air Force (USAF) in Guam has determined that the crash was caused by moisture on sensors which caused the jet to receive inaccurate data.
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Original:  The aircraft, belonging to USAF's 509th Air Wing and carrying the name Spirit of Kansas, was attempting takeoff from Andersen Air Force Base on February 23 this year when the crash occured .
Revised:  The aircraft, belonging to USAF's 509th Air Wing and carrying the name Spirit of Kansas, was attempting takeoff from Andersen Air Force Base on February 23 this year when the crash occurred .
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Original:  Moisture in three of the 24 air pressure sensors caused the sensors, all on the port side, to feed back innacurate data to the flight computer.
Revised:  Moisture in three of the 24 air pressure sensors caused the sensors, all on the port side, to feed back inaccurate data to the flight computer.
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Original:  The misfunction also meant that the sensors showed the plane to be in a nose down position, causing it to command a high level of pitch, around 30 degrees.
Revised:  The malfunction also meant that the sensors showed the plane to be in a nose down position, causing it to command a high level of pitch, around 30 degrees.
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Original:  They were injured, with Grieve suffering compression fractures to his spine, but surviving .
Revised:  They were injured, with Grieve suffering compression fractures to his spine, but survived .
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Original:  The vulnerability of the sensors to moisture was first detected by aircrews and maintenance staff in 2006, at which time it was discovered that turning on the 500 degree pitot heat prior to sensor callibration would evaporate the water and cause a return to normal readings.
Revised:  The vulnerability of the sensors to moisture was first detected by aircrews and maintenance staff in 2006, at which time it was discovered that turning on the 500 degree pitot heat prior to sensor calibration would evaporate the water and cause a return to normal readings.
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Original: Saturday night , at approximately 8:30 p.m. PST on Mt. Washington in Los Angeles, California, a brush blaze broke out on the southwestern side of the hill.
Revised: Brush blaze on Mt. Washington Saturday evening , at approximately 8:30 p.m. PST on Mt. Washington in Los Angeles, California, a brush blaze broke out on the southwestern side of the hill.
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Original:  Firefighters were on the scene by 8:30 p.m. with fire trucks, paramedics units, surveillance helicopters, and water-equipped helicopters.
Revised:  Firefighters were on the scene by 8:30 p.m. with fire trucks, paramedic units, surveillance helicopters, and water-equipped helicopters.
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Original: Haywood says many people are playing The Game which takes advantage of the  White Bear Phenomenon.
Revised: Haywood says many people are playing The Game which takes advantage of the w: White Bear Phenomenon.
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Original: Haywood says many people are playing The Game which takes advantage of the w: White Bear Phenomenon.
Revised: Haywood says many people are playing The Game which takes advantage of the White Bear Phenomenon.
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Original:  a site dedicated to informing the masses about a widely spreading and popular game aptly called "The Game"  .
Revised:  a site dedicated to informing the masses about a game called "The Game" .
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Original: Western Australia Master Builders Association has demanded the Carpenter Government call an emergence cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis griping WA. MBA spokesperson said that hundreds of workers have already been stood down many without pay, and that the cost of building material is soaring.
Revised: Western Australian Master Builders Association has demanded the Carpenter Government call an emergence cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis griping WA. MBA spokesperson said that hundreds of workers have already been stood down many without pay, and that the cost of building material is soaring.
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Original: Western Australia Master Builders Association has demanded the Carpenter Government call an emergence cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis griping WA. MBA spokesperson said that hundreds of workers have already been stood down many without pay, and that the cost of building material is soaring.
Revised: Western Australia Master Builders Association demanded the Carpenter Government call an emergence cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis griping WA. MBA spokesperson said that hundreds of workers have already been stood down many without pay, and that the cost of building material is soaring.
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Original:  Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It’s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week    
Revised:  Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It’s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week . 
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Original: Western Australian Master Builders Association  demanded the Carpenter Government call an emergence cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis griping WA. MBA spokesperson said that hundreds of workers have already been stood down many without pay, and that the cost of building material is soaring.
Revised: Western Australian Master Builders Association yesterday demanded the Carpenter Government call an emergence cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis griping WA. MBA spokesperson said that hundreds of workers have already been stood down many without pay, and that the cost of building material is soaring.
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Original:  Premier Carpenter has called a meeting of ministers and industry representatives  on sunday to discuss solutions to the growing crisis.
Revised:  Premier Carpenter has announced a meeting of ministers and industry representatives on sunday to discuss solutions to the growing crisis.
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Original:  Premier Carpenter has called a meeting of ministers and industry representatives  on sunday to discuss solutions to the growing crisis.
Revised:  Premier Carpenter has called a meeting of ministers and industry representatives to take place on sunday to discuss solutions to the growing crisis.
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