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Original:  Can the authors of this posting check their facts%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The name of the battle is "Battle of Maqongqo Hills" 29th January 1840%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Wiki location for this battle is also incorrect The Battle took place near the present day stock sale yards at Candover west of Mkuze in North Eastern KZN%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Here are the references 1.)
Revised:  Can the authors of this posting check their facts%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The name of the battle is "Battle of Maqongqo Hills" 29th January 1840%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Battle took place near the present day stock sale yards at Candover west of Mkuze in North Eastern KZN%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Here are the references 1.)
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Original:  Can the authors of this posting check their facts%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The name of the battle is "Battle of Maqongqo Hills" 29th January 1840%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Wiki location for this battle is also incorrect The Battle took place near the present day stock sale yards at Candover west of Mkuze in North Eastern KZN%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Here are the references 1.)
Revised:  Can the authors of this posting check their facts%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The name of the battle is "Battle of Maqongqo Hills" 29th January 1840%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Wiki location for this battle is also incorrect %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Here are the references 1.)
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Original:  Can the authors of this posting check their facts%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The name of the battle is "Battle of Maqongqo Hills" 29th January 1840%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Wiki location for this battle is also incorrect The Battle took place near the present day stock sale yards at Candover west of Mkuze in North Eastern KZN%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Here are the references 1.)
Revised:  Can the authors of this posting check their facts%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The name of the battle is "Battle of Maqongqo Hills" 29th January 1840%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Wiki location for this battle is also incorrect The Battle took place near the present day stock sale yards at Candover west of Mkuze in North Eastern KZN%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1.)
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Original:  Andrew Dumminy Bill Guest Natal and Zululand from Earliest times to 1910 UNP Press 1989 Pages 93 . 122%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2.) John LaBand Rope of Sand 1995 Jonathan Ball Pages 116 -118 3.) Peter Becker Rule of Fear 1972 Longmans Green Page 249%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 4.) C.T. Binns The Last Zulu King 1963 Longmans Green Page
Revised:  Andrew Dumminy Bill Guest Natal and Zululand from Earliest times to 1910 UNP Press 1989 Pages 93 . 122%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3.) Peter Becker Rule of Fear 1972 Longmans Green Page 249%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 4.) C.T. Binns The Last Zulu King 1963 Longmans Green Page
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Original:  Andrew Dumminy Bill Guest Natal and Zululand from Earliest times to 1910 UNP Press 1989 Pages 93 . 122%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2.) John LaBand Rope of Sand 1995 Jonathan Ball Pages 116 -118 3.) Peter Becker Rule of Fear 1972 Longmans Green Page 249%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 4.) C.T. Binns The Last Zulu King 1963 Longmans Green Page
Revised:  Andrew Dumminy Bill Guest Natal and Zululand from Earliest times to 1910 UNP Press 1989 Pages 93 . 122%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2.) John LaBand Rope of Sand 1995 Jonathan Ball Pages 116 -118 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 4.) C.T. Binns The Last Zulu King 1963 Longmans Green Page
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Original: Overcoming the problem of poor fishery management may be work best by transitioning to rights-based fishing and self-governance, which incorporates participatory governance theory.
Revised: Poor fishery management may be work best by transitioning to rights-based fishing and self-governance, which incorporates participatory governance theory.
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Original: Overcoming the problem of poor fishery management may be work best by transitioning to rights-based fishing and self-governance, which incorporates participatory governance theory.
Revised: Overcoming the problem of poor fishery management may be overcome by transitioning to rights-based fishing and self-governance, which incorporates participatory governance theory.
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Original:  While a freedom of rights will result in economic benefits, there is a possibility of a monopolisation by more larger and powerful shareholders that will squeeze out small-scaled operations.
Revised:  While rights may result in economic benefits, there is a possibility of a monopolisation by more larger and powerful shareholders that will squeeze out small-scaled operations.
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Original:  While a freedom of rights will result in economic benefits, there is a possibility of a monopolisation by more larger and powerful shareholders that will squeeze out small-scaled operations.
Revised:  While a freedom of rights will result in economic benefits, there is a possibility of monopolization by larger and powerful shareholders that will squeeze out small-scaled operations.
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Original:  The problem though with fisher folk having more rights, is they subsequently lack the transfer of skills to do with information, assessment, management and negotiation  and they also lack sufficient funding due to their self-governing nature .
Revised:  While it may be more equitable for fisher folk to have more rights, is they subsequently lack the transfer of skills to do with information, assessment, management and negotiation and they also lack sufficient funding due to their self-governing nature .
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Original:  The problem though with fisher folk having more rights, is they subsequently lack the transfer of skills to do with information, assessment, management and negotiation  and they also lack sufficient funding due to their self-governing nature .
Revised:  The problem though with fisher folk having more rights, they may lack the skills to manage fisheries information, assessment, management and negotiation and they also lack sufficient funding due to their self-governing nature .
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Original:  The problem though with fisher folk having more rights, is they subsequently lack the transfer of skills to do with information, assessment, management and negotiation  and they also lack sufficient funding due to their self-governing nature .
Revised:  The problem though with fisher folk having more rights, is they subsequently lack the transfer of skills to do with information, assessment, management and negotiation ; and they also lack sufficient funding due to their self-governing nature .
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Original:  The problem though with fisher folk having more rights, is they subsequently lack the transfer of skills to do with information, assessment, management and negotiation  and they also lack sufficient funding due to their self-governing nature .
Revised:  The problem though with fisher folk having more rights, is they subsequently lack the transfer of skills to do with information, assessment, management and negotiation and they also lack sufficient funding to carry out these roles .
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Original:  The Marine Stewardship Council (MSC) introduced this through a fishery certification programme, with the incentive that the consumer will buy fish only caught by sustainable fisheries.
Revised:  The Marine Stewardship Council (MSC) introduced such incentives through a fishery certification programme, with the incentive that the consumer will buy fish only caught by sustainable fisheries.
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Original:  This in turn creates a cycle that encourages the producer to abide by sustainable practices to gain the custom .
Revised:  This in turn creates a cycle that encourages the producer to abide by sustainable practices .
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Original:  It comprises Regional Seas Programme of UNEP creating programs to be managed and coordinated by countries that share a common body of water.
Revised:  The Regional Seas Programme of UNEP creating programs to be managed and coordinated by countries that share a common body of water.
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Original:  It comprises Regional Seas Programme of UNEP creating programs to be managed and coordinated by countries that share a common body of water.
Revised:  It comprises Regional Seas Programme of UNEP creates programs to be managed and coordinated by countries that share a common body of water.
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Original:  In 2009, 79.9 million tonnes of fish were caught from a marine environment .
Revised:  In 2009, 79.9 million tonnes of fish were caught from marine environments .
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Original:   The General Assembly of the United Nations is seen as the leading international body for global ocean governance.
Revised:  Because ocean governance depends on the integrated management process within one state, the engagement of all corporations and government ministries should function at a national level with focus directed to the oceans. The issue of ocean development at a national level is currently low on a political agenda as mentioned above, but for there to be a successful integration of ocean policies leading to developments, the oversight in creating new structures and integrations must be sustainable. The General Assembly of the United Nations is seen as the leading international body for global ocean governance.
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Original:  The underlying reasoning behind this is the market has to have the desire in order to go promote environmental protection, however this is rarely the case.
Revised:  The underlying reasoning behind this is the market has to have the desire in order to promote environmental protection, however this is rarely the case.
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Original: Used as an umbrella term to refer to anyone who directly works with young children from infancy to age 8.
Revised: An early childhood professional is anyone who directly works with young children from infancy to age 8.
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Original:  In large population-based epidemiological studies, JEMs may be used as a quick and systematic means of converting coded occupational data (job titles) into a matrix of possible exposuresKauppinen TP, Mutanen PO, Seitsamo JT. Magnitude of misclassification bias when using a job-exposure matrix.
Revised:  In large population-based epidemiological studies, JEMs may be used as a quick and systematic means of converting coded occupational data (job titles) into a matrix of possible exposures,Kauppinen TP, Mutanen PO, Seitsamo JT. Magnitude of misclassification bias when using a job-exposure matrix.
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Original:  Kauppinen TP, Mutanen PO, Seitsamo JT. Magnitude of misclassification bias when using a job-exposure matrix.
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Original:  Internet%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Scandinavian Journal of Work, Environment Health 1992 Apr;18(2):105-112.
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Original:  Internet%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Scandinavian Journal of Work, Environment Health 1992 Apr;18(2):105-112.
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Original:  Internet%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Scandinavian Journal of Work, Environment Health 1992 Apr;18(2):105-112.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% cited 2011 Dec 16 Available from: URL Disadvantages of using a JEM Typical problems associated with use of JEMs are as follows: Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which results in nondifferential misclassification of exposuresKauppinen TP, Mutanen PO, Seitsamo JT. Magnitude of misclassification bias when using a job-exposure matrix.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% Available from: URL Disadvantages of using a JEM Typical problems associated with use of JEMs are as follows: Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which results in nondifferential misclassification of exposuresKauppinen TP, Mutanen PO, Seitsamo JT. Magnitude of misclassification bias when using a job-exposure matrix.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% cited 2011 Dec 16 Available from: URL Disadvantages of using a JEM Typical problems associated with use of JEMs are as follows: Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which results in nondifferential misclassification of exposuresKauppinen TP, Mutanen PO, Seitsamo JT. Magnitude of misclassification bias when using a job-exposure matrix.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% cited 2011 Dec 16 Disadvantages of using a JEM Typical problems associated with use of JEMs are as follows: Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which results in nondifferential misclassification of exposuresKauppinen TP, Mutanen PO, Seitsamo JT. Magnitude of misclassification bias when using a job-exposure matrix.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% cited 2011 Dec 16 Available from: URL Disadvantages of using a JEM Typical problems associated with use of JEMs are as follows: Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which results in nondifferential misclassification of exposuresKauppinen TP, Mutanen PO, Seitsamo JT. Magnitude of misclassification bias when using a job-exposure matrix.
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Original: A job-exposure matrix (JEM) is a tool used to assess exposure to potential hazards to health  in occupational epidemiological studies.
Revised: A job-exposure matrix (JEM) is a tool used to assess exposure to potential health in occupational epidemiological studies.
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Original:  Essentially, a JEM comprises a list of levels of exposure to a variety of usually harmful (or potentially harmful) agents for each of a number of occupational titles.
Revised:  Essentially, a JEM comprises a list of levels of exposure to a variety of harmful (or potentially harmful) agents for each of a number of occupational titles.
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Original:  Essentially, a JEM comprises a list of levels of exposure to a variety of usually harmful (or potentially harmful) agents for each of a number of occupational titles.
Revised:  Essentially, a JEM comprises a list of levels of exposure to a variety of usually harmful (or potentially harmful) agents for selected occupational titles.
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Original:  Disadvantages of using a JEM Typical problems associated with use of JEMs are as follows: Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which results in nondifferential misclassification of exposures
Revised:  Disadvantages of using a JEM Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which results in nondifferential misclassification of exposures
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Original:  Disadvantages of using a JEM Typical problems associated with use of JEMs are as follows: Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which results in nondifferential misclassification of exposures
Revised:  Disadvantages of using a JEM Typical problems associated with use of JEMs are as follows: Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which can result in nondifferential exposure misclassification.
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Original: Advantages of the JEM approach Assessing exposure by title is less costly than looking at individual cases.
Revised: Advantages Assessing exposure by title is less costly than looking at individual cases.
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Original:  Disadvantages of using a JEM Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which can result in nondifferential exposure misclassification.
Revised:  Disadvantages Variability of exposure within occupational classes in different workplaces, countries, or throughout time is commonly not taken into account, which can result in nondifferential exposure misclassification.
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Original: [cited 2011 Dec 16] Available from: URL obviating the need to assess each individual's exposure in detail.
Revised: [cited 2011 Dec 16] Available from: URL eliminating the need to assess each individual's exposure in detail.
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Original:  Scandinavian Journal of Work, Environment & Health 1992 Apr;18(2):105-112. cited 2011 Dec 16 Available from: URL eliminating the need to assess each individual's exposure in detail.
Revised:  Scandinavian Journal of Work, Environment & Health 1992 Apr;18(2):105-112. Available from: URL eliminating the need to assess each individual's exposure in detail.
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Original:  Scandinavian Journal of Work, Environment & Health 1992 Apr;18(2):105-112. cited 2011 Dec 16 Available from: URL eliminating the need to assess each individual's exposure in detail.
Revised:  Scandinavian Journal of Work, Environment & Health 1992 Apr;18(2):105-112. cited 2011 Dec 16 eliminating the need to assess each individual's exposure in detail.
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Original:  His death is said to have had a chilling effect on other journalists.
Revised:  His death had a chilling effect on other journalists.
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Original:  A Lancet article published in 2010 that the prevalence of childhood obesity during the past two to three decades, much like the United States, has increased in most other industrialized nations, excluding Russia and Poland.
Revised:  In 2010 that the prevalence of childhood obesity during the past two to three decades, much like the United States, has increased in most other industrialized nations, excluding Russia and Poland.
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Original:  The Duke University researchers also discovered that although it had been believed that obesity in children had been on a decline in recent years, obesity in children at all ages has actually been increasing .
Revised:  The Duke University researchers also discovered that although it had been believed that obesity in children had been on a decline in recent years, obesity in children at all ages has actually been increasing 
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Revised: Family and the public view Children are often viewed as the vulnerable population, needing more attention from government policies and family. The media also portrays this in shows and movies, which can bring a negative effect towards parents whose children are obese by placing blame and responsibility solely in the parents . United States upright=1.
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Original:  As of 2015-2016, in the United States, 18.5\% of children and adolescents have obesity, which affects approximately 13.7 million children and adolescents.
Revised:  According to the CDC, as of 2015-2016, in the United States, 18.5\% of children and adolescents have obesity, which affects approximately 13.7 million children and adolescents.
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Original:  Prevalence  For the 2015–2016 year, the CDC found that the prevalence of obesity for children aged 2-19 years old, in the U.S., was 18.5\%.
Revised:  Prevalence According to the CDC, For the 2015–2016 year, the CDC found that the prevalence of obesity for children aged 2-19 years old, in the U.S., was 18.5\%.
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Original:  It affects children of all ages and some ethnic groups more than others, 25.8\% Hispanics, 22.0\% non-Hispanic blacks, 14.1\% non-Hispanic white children are affected by obesity  Prevalence has remained high over the past three decades across most age, sex, racial/ethnic, and socioeconomic groups, and represents a three-fold increase from one generation ago and is expected to continue rising.
Revised:  It affects children of all ages and some ethnic groups more than others, 25.8\% Hispanics, 22.0\% non-Hispanic blacks, 14.1\% non-Hispanic white children are affected by obesity . Prevalence has remained high over the past three decades across most age, sex, racial/ethnic, and socioeconomic groups, and represents a three-fold increase from one generation ago and is expected to continue rising.
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Original:  Obesity and overweight for professionals: Childhood: Basics | DNPAO | CDC cited 11/26/2011 2011%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Available URL (accessed November 26, 2011).
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Original:  Obesity and overweight for professionals: Childhood: Basics | DNPAO | CDC cited 11/26/2011 2011%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Available URL (accessed November 26, 2011).
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Original:  Obesity and overweight for professionals: Childhood: Basics | DNPAO | CDC cited 11/26/2011 2011%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Available URL (accessed November 26, 2011).
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Original: Obesity and overweight for professionals: Childhood: Basics | DNPAO | CDC cited 11/26/2011 2011%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Available from URL (accessed November 26, 2011 ).
Revised: Obesity and overweight for professionals: Childhood: Basics | DNPAO | CDC %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Available from URL (accessed November 26, 2011 ).
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Original: Obesity and overweight for professionals: Childhood: Basics | DNPAO | CDC cited 11/26/2011 2011%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Available from URL (accessed November 26, 2011 ).
Revised: Obesity and overweight for professionals: Childhood: Basics | DNPAO | CDC cited 11/26/2011 2011%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ).
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Original:  According to the CDC, as of 2015-2016 , in the United States, 18.5\% of children and adolescents have obesity, which affects approximately 13.7 million children and adolescents.
Revised:  According to the CDC, as of 2015–2016 , in the United States, 18.5\% of children and adolescents have obesity, which affects approximately 13.7 million children and adolescents.
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