wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Harper leads a minority government and needs to win more seats in Quebec in order to secure a majority in the next election, widely expected to be held next year   
Revised:  Harper leads a minority government and needs to win more seats in Quebec in order to secure a majority in the next election, widely expected to be held next year . 
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Original: Category:Canada Category:North America Category:Main Page The Harpergovernment 's strong support for Israel in its current crisis with Lebanon is unpopular with many Canadians.
Revised: Category:Canada Category:North America Category:Main Page Prime Minister Stephen Harper 's strong support for Israel in its current crisis with Lebanon is unpopular with many Canadians.
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Original:  Nevertheless Prime Minister Harper told reporters at a caucus retreat yesterday that he believes his position is in tune with Canadians and will be maintaining it.
Revised:  Nevertheless , Harper told reporters at a caucus retreat yesterday that he believes his position is in tune with Canadians and will be maintaining it.
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Original:  A recent Strategic Counsel poll for the BellGlobeMedia found that 45\% of Canadians disagree with the Conservative government's support for Israel, a number that climbs to 61 per cent in Quebec.
Revised:  A recent Strategic Counsel poll for BellGlobeMedia found that 45\% of Canadians disagree with the Conservative government's support for Israel, a number that climbs to 61 per cent in Quebec.
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Original: Israel's military has put the Speaker of the Palestinina parliament under house arrest at his home in the West Bank . Aziz Dweik, a leading member of Hamas has been confined to his residence since the army surrounded his Ramallah home.
Revised: Israel's military has put the Speaker of the Palestinian parliament under house arrest at his home in the West Bank . Aziz Dweik, a leading member of Hamas has been confined to his residence since the army surrounded his Ramallah home.
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Original: Israel's military has put the Speaker of the Palestinina parliament under house arrest at his home in the West Bank . Aziz Dweik, a leading member of Hamas has been confined to his residence since the army surrounded his Ramallah home.
Revised: Israel's military has put the Speaker of the Palestinina parliament under house arrest . Aziz Dweik, a leading member of Hamas has been confined to his residence since the army surrounded his Ramallah home.
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Original:  The detentions began as a result of an Israeli soldier being captured by Palestinian militants  
Revised:  The detentions began as a result of an Israeli soldier being captured by Palestinian militants . 
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Original:  The detentions began as a result of an Israeli soldier being captured by Palestinian militants . Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflictsCategory:War Category:Israel Category:Palesti
Revised:  The detentions began as a result of an Israeli soldier being captured by Palestinian militants Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflictsCategory:War Category:Israel Category:Palesti
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Original:  The detentions began as a result of an Israeli soldier being captured by Palestinian militants . Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflictsCategory:War Category:Israel Category:Palesti
Revised:  The detentions began as a result of an Israeli soldier being captured by Palestinian militants . 
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Original:  An Israeli army spokesperson told the Reuters news agency that "Since Hamas is a terrorist organisation, (Dweik) is a target for arrest."
Revised:  An Israeli army spokesperson told the Reuters news agency that "Since Hamas is a terrorist organisation, Dweik is a target for arrest."
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Original: Israel's military has put the Speaker of the Palestinian parliament under house arrest.
Revised: Israel's military has put the Speaker of the Palestinian Legislature under house arrest.
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Original: Israel's military has put the Speaker of the Palestinian Legislature under house arrest.
Revised: Israel's military has placed the Speaker of the Palestinian Legislature under house arrest.
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Original:  The detentions began as a result of an Israeli soldier being captured by Palestinian militants
Revised:  The detentions began after Palestinian militants captured an Israeli soldier being captured by Palestinian militants
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Original:  Although taxpayers in the $75,000 to $100 ,000 range paid 18.9\% of their income in taxes, 1.2\% less than those making over $10,000,000, taxpayers in the $100,000 to $200,000 range paid an average of 20.6\%, or 0.5\% more than those making over $ 10,000,000.
Revised:  Although taxpayers in the $100,000 to $200 ,000 range paid 18.9\% of their income in taxes, 1.2\% less than those making over $10,000,000, taxpayers in the $100,000 to $200,000 range paid an average of 20.6\%, or 0.5\% more than those making over $ 10,000,000.
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Original:  Although taxpayers in the $75,000 to $100 ,000 range paid 18.9\% of their income in taxes, 1.2\% less than those making over $10,000,000, taxpayers in the $100,000 to $200,000 range paid an average of 20.6\%, or 0.5\% more than those making over $ 10,000,000.
Revised:  Although taxpayers in the $75,000 to $100 ,000 range paid an average of 20.6\%, or 0.5\% more than those making over $10,000,000, taxpayers in the $100,000 to $200,000 range paid an average of 20.6\%, or 0.5\% more than those making over $ 10,000,000.
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Original: The United State's income tax is considered to be a progressive tax where different tax brackets are taxed at different rates .
Revised: The United State's income tax is considered to be a progressive tax system, in which people with more income pay a higher percentage of it in taxes .
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Original:  If taxpayers earning over $10,000,000 were taxed at 22.3\%, the rate of those earning between $1,000,000 and $10,000,000, the federal government would have recieved an additional $4.8 billion in revenue.
Revised:  If taxpayers earning over $10,000,000 were taxed at 22.3\%, the rate of those earning between $1,000,000 and $10,000,000, the federal government would have received an additional $4.8 billion in revenue.
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Original:  Taxpayers who earned more than $10,000,000 paid a lower average rate than any catagory of taxpayer earning over $100,000.
Revised:  Taxpayers who earned more than $10,000,000 paid a lower average rate than any category of taxpayer earning over $100,000.
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Original: The   United State's income tax is considered to be a progressive tax system, in which people with more income pay a higher percentage of it in taxes.
Revised: The The United State's income tax is considered to be a progressive tax system, in which people with more income pay a higher percentage of it in taxes.
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Original:  The vaccinated rodents showed less body weight increase, even though they ate as much as their non-vaccinated counterparts.
Revised:  The vaccinated rodents showed less increase in body weight even though they ate as much as their non-vaccinated counterparts.
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Original:  Vaccination could become a promising new tool in the battle against the obesity pandemic, although we are still many years from application in humans.
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Original:  The researchers used the  immune system to counter the effects of ghrelin .
Revised:  In this experiment, the researchers used the immune system to counter the effects of ghrelin .
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Original:  The researchers used the  immune system to counter the effects of ghrelin .
Revised:  The researchers used the body's own immune system to counter the effects of ghrelin .
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Original:  The appetiteremained unchanged , but the other effects were altered resulting in a prevention of weight gain.
Revised:  The appetiteremained unchanged , but the other effects were altered resulting in a lesser weight gain.
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Original:  The rats in this study were put on a low-energy, low-fat and probably less tasty diet .
Revised:  The rats in this study were on a low-energy, low-fat and probably less tasty diet .
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Original:  So, it remains uncertain wether these findings could be expanded to Western society .
Revised:  It remains uncertain whether these findings could be expanded to Western society .
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Original:  So, it remains uncertain wether these findings could be expanded to Western society .
Revised:  So, it remains uncertain wether these findings could be extended to that setting .
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Original:  The question also remains wether it will prove effective in already obese subjects, and the group plans further investigations into this matter.
Revised:  The question also remains whether it will prove effective in already obese subjects, and the group plans further investigations into this matter.
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Original:  Such a vaccination makes the immune system target and selectively destroy the protein .
Revised:  Vaccination teaches the immune system target and selectively destroy the protein .
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Original:  Such a vaccination makes the immune system target and selectively destroy the protein .
Revised:  Such a vaccination makes the immune system to recognise and destroy a target .
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Original:  In this experiment, that protein was Ghrelin , a hormone produced by the stomach in both humans and rodents that stimulates appetite and promotes the build-up of fat tissue.
Revised:  In this experiment, the target was ghrelin , a hormone produced by the stomach in both humans and rodents that stimulates appetite and promotes the build-up of fat tissue.
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Original:  In this experiment, that protein was Ghrelin , a hormone produced by the stomach in both humans and rodents that stimulates appetite and promotes the build-up of fat tissue.
Revised:  In this experiment, that protein was Ghrelin , a hormone produced by the stomach in both humans and rodents . Ghrelin stimulates appetite and promotes the build-up of fat tissue.
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Original:  Rats treated in this way had retained the same appetite, but the other effects were altered resulting in a lesser weight gain  .
Revised:  Rats treated in this way had retained the same appetite, but the other effects were altered resulting in a lesser weight gain . The fact that the appetite remained unchanged came as a surprise to the investigators, but the idea of being able to eat the same and put on less weight is intriguing .
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Original:  The vaccinated rodents showed less increase in body weight even though they ate as much as their non-vaccinated counterparts  .
Revised:  The vaccinated rodents showed less increase in body weight even though they ate as much as their non-vaccinated counterparts . If supported by further studies, vaccination could become a promising new tool in the battle against the obesity pandemic, although application in humans is probably not for the near future .
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Original:  It was also previously shown that mice with the Ghrelin gene knocked out (makes the mice unable to produce ghrelin), expend more energy and break down their fat stores more easily.
Revised:  It was also previously shown that mice with the ghrelin gene knocked out (makes the mice unable to produce ghrelin), expend more energy and break down their fat stores more easily.
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Original:  Vaccinated rats retained the same appetite, but the other effects were altered resulting in a lesser weight gain.
Revised:  In this study, vaccinated rats retained the same appetite, but the other effects were altered resulting in a lesser weight gain.
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Original: ]] American scientists have succesfully used a vaccine to slow down weight gain in an animal model, as reported in the scientific journal Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences (PNAS).
Revised: ]] American scientists have successfully used a vaccine to slow down weight gain in an animal model, as reported in the scientific journal Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences (PNAS).
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Original:  The group is already planning further studies to acertain the therapeutic potential of the new vaccine.
Revised:  The group is already planning further studies to ascertain the therapeutic potential of the new vaccine.
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Original: The rats in this study were on a low-energy, low-fat diet quite , unlike the typical diet of people with obesity, where energy-rich snacks predominate.
Revised: The rats in this study were on a low-energy, low-fat diet quite unlike the typical diet of people with obesity, where energy-rich snacks predominate.
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Original: David Oakley was one of six men who volunteered to take part in a trial of a drug intended to cure conditions like rheumatoid arthritis and leukaemia in March.
Revised: David Oakley was one of six men who volunteered to take part in a trial of a drug intended to cure conditions like rheumatoid arthritis and leukemia in March.
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Original: Good opening Several shows sold out in a strong opening weekend, including comedian Russell Brand, the "people's poet" Pam Ayres in his maiden Fringe venture , One Man Star Wars at the Underbelly.
Revised: Good opening Several shows sold out in a strong opening weekend, including those by comedians Russell Brand, the "people's poet" Pam Ayres in his maiden Fringe venture , One Man Star Wars at the Underbelly.
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Original: Good opening Several shows sold out in a strong opening weekend, including comedian Russell Brand, the "people's poet" Pam Ayres in his maiden Fringe venture , One Man Star Wars at the Underbelly.
Revised: Good opening Several shows sold out in a strong opening weekend, including comedian Russell Brand, the "people's poet" Pam Ayres in his maiden Fringe venture and One Man Star Wars at the Underbelly.
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Original:  The festival's jop openings included rickshaw drivers, show announcers to shouts details of the impending show and tell the audience when it is time to take their seats, and collectors to pick up flyers that people throw away.
Revised:  The festival's job openings included rickshaw drivers, show announcers to shouts details of the impending show and tell the audience when it is time to take their seats, and collectors to pick up flyers that people throw away.
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Original: The religious theme recieved further impetus from the Racial and Religious Hatred Act introduced in the UK, which sought to give all faiths equal protection, was condemned by comedians such as Rowan Atkinson who feared it would turn satire into a criminal offence.
Revised: The religious theme received further impetus from the Racial and Religious Hatred Act introduced in the UK, which sought to give all faiths equal protection, was condemned by comedians such as Rowan Atkinson who feared it would turn satire into a criminal offence.
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Original:  Gudgin also called for an urgent Scottish Executive response to the Thundering Hooves report into the future of Edinburgh ’ s festivals, published this May.
Revised:  Gudgin also called for an urgent Scottish Executive response to the Thundering Hooves report into the future of Edinburgh ' s festivals, published this May.
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Original:  Michael Schumacher ended his race not long after Alonso, 'cause of the damaged suspencion in the numerous battles during the rac 
Revised:  Michael Schumacher ended his race not long after Alonso, 'cause of the damaged suspencion in the numerous battles during the race. 
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Original: Rainy weekend turned out to be a great show for the spectators of the 13-th round of the FIA Formula-1 championship  Hungarian Grand Prix held on Hungaroring, Budapest  .
Revised: A rainy weekend turned out to be a great show for the spectators of the 13-th round of the FIA Formula-1 championship Hungarian Grand Prix held on Hungaroring, Budapest .
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Original: Rainy weekend turned out to be a great show for the spectators of the 13-th round of the FIA Formula-1 championship  Hungarian Grand Prix held on Hungaroring, Budapest  .
Revised: Rainy weekend turned out to be a great show for the spectators of the 13th round of the FIA Formula-1 championship Hungarian Grand Prix held on Hungaroring, Budapest .
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Original:  Absolutely unlucky race for  Renault and Ferrari teams, only Filipe Massa finished at the tail of the peleton.
Revised:  An absolutely unlucky race for Renault and Ferrari teams, only Filipe Massa finished at the tail of the peleton.
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Original:  Absolutely unlucky race for  Renault and Ferrari teams, only Filipe Massa finished at the tail of the peleton.
Revised:  Absolutely unlucky race for the Renault and Ferrari teams, only Filipe Massa finished at the tail of the peleton.
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso was in the lead for the most part of the race, but ended it right after his pit-stop, probably because a badly tucked right front wheel.
Revised:  His teammate Fernando Alonso was in the lead for most of the race, but ended it right after his pit-stop, probably because a badly tucked right front wheel.
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Original:  Michael Schumacher ended his race not long after Alonso, 'cause of the damaged suspencion in the numerous battles during the race.
Revised:  Michael Schumacher ended his race not long after Alonso, because of the suspension damage in the numerous battles during the race.
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Original:  Tough luck for Kimi Raikkonen, who collided with Vitantonio Luizzi and was replaced by his teammate Pedro De La Rosa on the second place.
Revised:  Tough luck for Kimi Raikkonen, who collided with Vitantonio Luizzi and was replaced by his teammate Pedro De La Rosa in second place.
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Original:  And a very good race for Nick Heifeld,  BMW-Sauber team  driver finished third.
Revised:  And a very good race for Nick Heifeld, the BMW-Sauber team driver finished third.
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Original:  And a very good race for Nick Heifeld,  BMW-Sauber team  driver finished third.
Revised:  And a very good race for Nick Heifeld, BMW-Sauber team 's driver finished third.
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Original:  The race probably unproved the popular statement that "the problem of Formula-1 races is no overtaking", saying that it's not completely tru   
Revised:  The race probably disproved the popular statement that "the problem of Formula-1 races is no overtaking", saying that it's not completely tru 
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Original:  The race probably unproved the popular statement that "the problem of Formula-1 races is no overtaking", saying that it's not completely tru   
Revised:  The race probably unproved the popular statement that "the problem of Formula-1 races is no overtaking", saying that it's not completely true 
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Original: An absolutely unlucky race for the Renault and Ferrari teams, only Filipe Massa finished at the tail of the peleton.
Revised: An absolutely unlucky race for the Renault and Ferrari teams, only Felipe Massa finished at the tail of the peleton.
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Original:  Gean-Carlo Fisicella lost control of his car and ended the race very soon after the start.
Revised:  Giancarlo Fisichella lost control of his car and ended the race very soon after the start.
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Original:  Tough luck for Kimi Raikkonen, who collided with Vitantonio Luizzi and was replaced by his teammate Pedro De La Rosa in second place.
Revised:  Tough luck for Kimi Raikkonen, who collided with Vitantonio Liuzzi and was replaced by his teammate Pedro De La Rosa in second place.
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Original: Syria's foreign minister has said that the resoultion is a "a recipe for the continuation of the war," and "adopted Israel's point of view only."
Revised: Syria's foreign minister has said that the resolution is a "a recipe for the continuation of the war," and "adopted Israel's point of view only."
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Original:  Syria has also warned that their armed forces are under orders to respond immediatly if Israel attacks.
Revised:  Syria has also warned that their armed forces are under orders to respond immediately if Israel attacks.
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Original:  Syria's foreign minister said that "If Israel attacks Syria by any mean , on the ground, by air, our leadership ordered the armed forces to reply immediately,"  "Syria is ready for the possibility of a regional war if the Israeli aggression continues.
Revised:  Syria's foreign minister said that "If Israel attacks Syria by any means , on the ground, by air, our leadership ordered the armed forces to reply immediately," "Syria is ready for the possibility of a regional war if the Israeli aggression continues.
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Original:  Syria's foreign minister said that "If Israel attacks Syria by any mean , on the ground, by air, our leadership ordered the armed forces to reply immediately,"  "Syria is ready for the possibility of a regional war if the Israeli aggression continues.
Revised:  Syria's foreign minister said that "If Israel attacks Syria by any mean , on the ground, by air, our leadership ordered the armed forces to reply immediately," and that "Syria is ready for the possibility of a regional war if the Israeli aggression continues.
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Original: Reuters has pulled a photograph of Beirut, Lebanon, admitting that they had alteredthe photo, saying "photo editing software was improperly used on this image.
Revised: The Reuters news agency has retracted a photograph of Beirut, Lebanon, admitting that they had alteredthe photo, saying "photo editing software was improperly used on this image.
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Original: Reuters has pulled a photograph of Beirut, Lebanon, admitting that they had alteredthe photo, saying "photo editing software was improperly used on this image.
Revised: Reuters has pulled a photograph of Beirut, Lebanon, after finding out that it was altered. Reuters released a statement, "photo editing software was improperly used on this image.
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Original:  The photograph had shown two chains of black smoke rising out of buildings in Beirut.
Revised:  The photograph had shown two plumes of black smoke rising out of buildings in Beirut.
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Original:  Meanwhile a Reuters employee is suspended after using Reuters internet access to issue a threat saying "I look forward to the day when you (Jewish/Zionist) pigs get your throats cut."
Revised:  Meanwhile a Reuters employee was suspended after using Reuters internet access to issue a threat saying "I look forward to the day when you (Jewish/Zionist) pigs get your throats cut."
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Original: Meanwhile a Reuters employee was suspended after using Reuters internet access to issue a threat saying "I look forward to the day when you (Jewish/Zionist) pigs get your throats cut."
Revised: Meanwhile a Reuters employee was suspended after using Reuters internet access to issue a threat saying "I look forward to the day when you pigs get your throats cut."
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Original:  The receiver Charles Johnson, owner of Little Green Footballs , says "This particular death threat is a bit different from the run of the mill hate mail we get around here, because an IP lookup on the sender reveals that he/she/it was using an account at none other than Reuters News,"  "I think it's more than fair to say that Reuters has a big problem."
Revised:  The E-mail was sent to Charles Johnson, owner of Little Green Footballs , says "This particular death threat is a bit different from the run of the mill hate mail we get around here, because an IP lookup on the sender reveals that he/she/it was using an account at none other than Reuters News," "I think it's more than fair to say that Reuters has a big problem."
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