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Original: File photo of Felipe Massa (2008) Interlagos Ferrari driver Felipe Massa wins the FIA Formula One 2008 Grande Prêmio Santander do Brasil at Autódromo José Carlos Pace, São Paulo, Brazil  Fernando Alonso came second while his Renault teammate Nelson Piquet Jr. slipped in the Senna's S-curve and broke his car's rear due to the wet track.
Revised: File photo of Felipe Massa (2008) Interlagos Ferrari driver Felipe Massa wins the FIA Formula One 2008 Grande Prêmio Santander do Brasil at Autódromo José Carlos Pace, São Paulo, Brazil Fernando Alonso came second while his Renault team mate Nelson Piquet Jr. slipped in the Senna's S-curve and broke his car's rear due to the wet track.
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Original:  On the last wet lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton not without a help from the lapped Kubica and took the championship chances from the McLaren driver.
Revised:  On the last wet lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton with help from the lapped Kubica and took the championship chances from the McLaren driver.
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Original:  On the last wet lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton not without a help from the lapped Kubica and took the championship chances from the McLaren driver.
Revised:  On the last wet lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton not without a help from the lapped Kubica taking the championship chance from the McLaren driver.
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Original:  But in the last corner "Subido do boxes"
Revised:  In the last corner "Subido do boxes"
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Original:  Still Ferrari mantained the lead over McLaren to win the Constructors' Cup
Revised:  Ferrari maintained the lead over McLaren to win the Constructors' Cup
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Original:  In the last corner " Subido do boxes"
Revised:  In the last corner " Subida dos boxes"
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Original: On the last wet lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton  with help from the lapped Kubica  taking the championship chance from the McLaren driver.
Revised: On the final lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton with help from the lapped Kubica taking the championship chance from the McLaren driver.
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Original: On the last wet lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton  with help from the lapped Kubica  taking the championship chance from the McLaren driver.
Revised: On the last wet lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton , with help from the lapped Kubica taking the championship chance from the McLaren driver.
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Original: On the last wet lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton  with help from the lapped Kubica  taking the championship chance from the McLaren driver.
Revised: On the last wet lap Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton with help from the lapped Kubica , seemingly taking the championship chance from the McLaren driver.
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Original:  In the last corner  "Subida dos boxes"
Revised:  However, in the last corner "Subida dos boxes"
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Original:  In the last corner  "Subida dos boxes"
Revised:  In the last corner —known as "Subida dos boxes"
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Original:   Timo Glock lost traction with his deteriorated tires and lost his position to Vettel with Hamilton passed him to win the Drivers' championship of the 2008 Formula One season.
Revised:  Timo Glock lost traction with his deteriorated tires and lost his position to Vettel with Hamilton passing him to win the Drivers' championship of the 2008 Formula One season.
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Original:  Massa missed out the title by just one point.
Revised:  Massa missed out on the season title by just one point.
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Original:  Ferrari maintained the lead over McLaren to win the Constructors' Cup
Revised:  Ferrari maintained the lead over McLaren to win the F1 Constructors' Championship
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Original:  On the final lap  Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton, with help from the lapped Kubica, seemingly taking the championship chance from the McLaren driver.
Revised:  On the final lap , Sebastian Vettel passed Lewis Hamilton, with help from the lapped Kubica, seemingly taking the championship chance from the McLaren driver.
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Original:  Lewis Hamilton won the championships Lewis Hamilton, who drives for McLaren, was able to hold on to take the F1 Driver's Championship.
Revised:  Lewis Hamilton won the championship Lewis Hamilton, who drives for McLaren, was able to hold on to take the F1 Driver's Championship.
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Original: Saint Nick's a church that overlooks the shopping center Whitestone, Queens, New York - A fire rushed through eight stores of the Whitestone Shopping Center (as officially named on Google Maps (address is 150-05 14th Road in Whitestone( near the Cross Island Parkway ))) in the borough of Queens in New York City.
Revised: Saint Nick's a church that overlooks the shopping center A fire rushed through eight stores of the Whitestone Shopping Center (as officially named on Google Maps (address is 150-05 14th Road in Whitestone( near the Cross Island Parkway ))) in the borough of Queens in New York City.
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Original: Saint Nick's a church that overlooks the shopping center Whitestone, Queens, New York - A fire rushed through eight stores of the Whitestone Shopping Center (as officially named on Google Maps (address is 150-05 14th Road in Whitestone( near the Cross Island Parkway ))) in the borough of Queens in New York City.
Revised: Saint Nick's a church that overlooks the shopping center Whitestone, Queens, New York - A fire rushed through eight stores of the Whitestone Shopping Center in Whitestone, Queens, New York, near the Cross Island Parkway ))) in the borough of Queens in New York City.
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Original: Saint Nick's a church that overlooks the shopping center Whitestone, Queens, New York - A fire rushed through eight stores of the Whitestone Shopping Center (as officially named on Google Maps (address is 150-05 14th Road in Whitestone( near the Cross Island Parkway ))) in the borough of Queens in New York City.
Revised: Saint Nick's a church that overlooks the shopping center Whitestone, Queens, New York - A fire rushed through eight stores of the Whitestone Shopping Center (as officially named on Google Maps (address is 150-05 14th Road in Whitestone( near the Cross Island Parkway in New York City.
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Original:  The fire started at around 1:00 AM Eastern Standard Time on November 2, 2008 in a diner /restaurant known as Lollipops.
Revised:  The fire started at around 1:00 AM Eastern Standard Time on November 2, 2008 in a diner known as Lollipops.
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Original:  According to local sources, Lollipops had become a popular restaurant in the area.
Revised:  According to local sources, Lollipops was a popular restaurant in the area.
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Original: With the restaurant Lollipops destroyed, the owner of the "popular" restaurant was very upset and did not release a statement.
Revised: According to WCBS-TV, with his diner Lollipops destroyed, the owner of the "popular" restaurant was very upset and did not release a statement.
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Original: With the restaurant Lollipops destroyed, the owner of the "popular" restaurant was very upset and did not release a statement.
Revised: With the restaurant Lollipops destroyed, the owner was too upset to comment.
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Original: A nearby restaurant, King's Chef, which serves Chinese food, was also damaged.
Revised: Nearby Chinese restaurant, King's Chef, which serves Chinese food, was also damaged.
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Original: A nearby restaurant, King's Chef, which serves Chinese food, was also damaged.
Revised: A nearby restaurant, King's Chef, was also damaged.
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Original:  The owner of the Chinese restaurant was upset and released this statement: "I cannot open because of whatever rules – tomorrow's Monday, Tuesday is a holiday . " He went on, saying this: "If I cannot get them to come tomorrow, I am going to lose big time."
Revised:  "I cannot open because of whatever rules – tomorrow's Monday, Tuesday is a holiday . " He went on, saying this: "If I cannot get them to come tomorrow, I am going to lose big time."
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Original:  The owner of the Chinese restaurant was upset and released this statement: "I cannot open because of whatever rules – tomorrow's Monday, Tuesday is a holiday . " He went on, saying this: "If I cannot get them to come tomorrow, I am going to lose big time."
Revised:  The owner of the Chinese restaurant was upset and released this statement: "I cannot open because of whatever rules – tomorrow's Monday, Tuesday is a holiday , " He went on, saying this: "If I cannot get them to come tomorrow, I am going to lose big time."
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Original: Nearby residents have also reacted to the horrible situation.
Revised: Nearby residents reacted to the horrible situation.
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Original: Nearby residents have also reacted to the horrible situation.
Revised: Nearby residents have also reacted to the situation.
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Original:  Senator Frank Padavan is quoted as such: "This is a calamity for many of these small businesses to be out of business, particularly in this economy . " 
Revised:  Senator Frank Padavan is quoted as such: "This is a calamity for many of these small businesses to be out of business, particularly in this economy , " 
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Original: The next day, investigators were boarding up the windows of the victimized stores.
Revised: The next day, investigators were boarding up the windows of the damaged stores.
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Original:  Items were found last week at his crash site in the Sierra Nevada Mountains along with his identification card, a one-hundred dollar bill, and a pair of shoes and a few bones believed to be his .
Revised:  Items were found last week at his crash site in the Sierra Nevada Mountains along with his identification card, a one-hundred dollar bill, and a pair of shoes . A few bones believed to be his .
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Original: Image:Fossett before globalflyer flight cropped.jpg|Steve Fossett in 2006 Image: NASA/Kim Shiflett According to California's Madera County Sheriff's office, DNA tests performed on bones found at the site of a plane crash in October, are confirmed to be those of adventurer Steve Fossett.
Revised:  According to California's Madera County Sheriff's office, DNA tests performed on bones found at the site of a plane crash in October, are confirmed to be those of adventurer Steve Fossett.
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Original:  Side effects associated with Avastin include hypertension and convulsion .
Revised: Avastin works by inhibiting angiogenesis: the development of new blood vessels. Fast growing tumors such as glioblastoma need a rapidly growing supply of blood vessels. Side effects associated with Avastin include hypertension and convulsion .
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Original:  A single course of Avastin treatment costs approximately $40,000.
Revised: Approximately 19,000 primary brain tumors were diagnosed in the United States last year. 60 percent were gliomas, including glioblastoma. In most of North America and Europe, incidence of glioblastoma each year is 2-3 cases per 100,000 persons. A single course of Avastin treatment costs approximately $40,000.
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Original:  Promising results in Phase II clinical trials and high mortality rates for glioblastoma led the company to seek early approval without Phase III trials  .
Revised:  Promising results in Phase II clinical trials led the company to seek early approval without Phase III trials .
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Original:  Promising results in Phase II clinical trials and high mortality rates for glioblastoma led the company to seek early approval without Phase III trials  .
Revised:  Promising results in Phase II clinical trials and high mortality rates for glioblastoma led the company to seek early approval before Phase III trials .
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Original:  91241 \%439,
Revised:  91341 \%439,
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Original:  32847 \%5Nevada531,
Revised:  42147 \%5Nevada531,
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Original:  089,82649 \%15North Dakota138,53045\%164,91953\%3Ohio20Oklahoma499,32934\%951,27066 \%7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3,184, 62155 \%2,584, 06344 \%21Rhode Island272,57263\%150,89135\%4South Carolina8South Dakota170, 87645\%202,99953 \%3Tennessee1, 063,32042 \%1, 462,55057 \%11Texas3, 514,44944 \%4, 450,32555 \%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\%5Vermont3Virginia1, 791,15452 \%1, 635,29247 \%13Washington11West Virginia298,31443\%392,18756 \%5Wisconsin1, 618,80956 \%1, 242,62743 \%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
Revised:  089,82649 \%15North Dakota138,53045\%164,91953\%3Ohio20Oklahoma499,32934\%951,27066 \%7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3,184, 62155 \%2,584, 11944 \%21Rhode Island272,57263\%150,89135\%4South Carolina8South Dakota170, 87645\%202,99953 \%3Tennessee1, 063,32042 \%1, 462,55057 \%11Texas3, 514,44944 \%4, 450,32555 \%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\%5Vermont3Virginia1, 791,15452 \%1, 635,29247 \%13Washington11West Virginia298,31443\%392,18756 \%5Wisconsin1, 618,80956 \%1, 242,62743 \%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
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Original:  The District of Columbia and at least 32 states had early voting before election day--Owl1988 (talk) 03:27, 7 November 2008 (UTC) . By October 31, over 23 million people had voted by mail or at early voting locations.
Revised:  The District of Columbia and at least 32 states had early voting before election day . By October 31, over 23 million people had voted by mail or at early voting locations.
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Original: 11345\%168,52353\% 3Ohio20Oklahoma502, 28634\%959,64566\%7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3, 184,80755 \%2, 584,11944 \%21Rhode Island272,57263\%150,89135 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 87745 \%203, 00253 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont3Virginia1,792,50252\% 1, 637,33847 \%13Washington11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
Revised: 11345\%168,52353\% 3Ohio20Oklahoma502, 28634\%959,64566\%7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3, 184,80755 \%2, 586,49444 \%21Rhode Island272,57263\%150,89135 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 87745 \%203, 00253 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont3Virginia1,792,50252\% 1, 637,33847 \%13Washington11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
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Original: 11345\%168,52353\% 3Ohio20Oklahoma502, 28634\%959,64566\%7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3, 184,80755 \%2, 584,11944 \%21Rhode Island272,57263\%150,89135 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 87745 \%203, 00253 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont3Virginia1,792,50252\% 1, 637,33847 \%13Washington11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
Revised: 11345\%168,52353\% 3Ohio20Oklahoma502, 28634\%959,64566\%7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3, 184,80755 \%2, 584,11944 \%21Rhode Island272,57263\%150,89135 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 88445 \%203, 00253 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont3Virginia1,792,50252\% 1, 637,33847 \%13Washington11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
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Original: 11345\%168,52353\% 3Ohio20Oklahoma502, 28634\%959,64566\%7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3, 184,80755 \%2, 584,11944 \%21Rhode Island272,57263\%150,89135 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 87745 \%203, 00253 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont3Virginia1,792,50252\% 1, 637,33847 \%13Washington11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
Revised: 11345\%168,52353\% 3Ohio20Oklahoma502, 28634\%959,64566\%7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3, 184,80755 \%2, 584,11944 \%21Rhode Island272,57263\%150,89135 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 87745 \%203, 01653 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont3Virginia1,792,50252\% 1, 637,33847 \%13Washington11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
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Original: 708,98851\%2,502,21847\%20Oklahoma502,28634\%959,64566\% 7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3,192,31655\%2,586,49444\%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735\%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170,88445\%203,01653\%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\%5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\%1,703,42447\% 13Washington11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
Revised: 708,98851\%2,502,21847\%20Oklahoma502,28634\%959,64566\% 7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3,192,31655\%2,586,49444\%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735\%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170,88445\%203,01653\%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\%5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\%1,703,42447\% 13Washington1,214,83858\%872,19341#11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
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Original: 64566\% 7Oregon913,53357\%660,47441\%7Pennsylvania 3, 192,31655 \%2, 586,49444 \%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 88445 \%203, 01653 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\% 1, 703,42447\%13Washington1,214,83858\%872,19341#11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
Revised: 64566\% 7Oregon7Pennsylvania 3, 192,31655 \%2, 586,49444 \%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 88445 \%203, 01653 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\% 1, 703,42447\%13Washington1,214,83858\%872,19341#11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
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Original: 64566\% 7Oregon913,53357\%660,47441\%7Pennsylvania 3, 192,31655 \%2, 586,49444 \%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 88445 \%203, 01653 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\% 1, 703,42447\%13Washington1,214,83858\%872,19341#11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
Revised: 64566\% 7Oregon913,53357\%660,47441\%7Pennsylvania 3, 192,31655 \%2, 584,11944 \%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 88445 \%203, 01653 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\% 1, 703,42447\%13Washington1,214,83858\%872,19341#11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
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Original: 64566\% 7Oregon913,53357\%660,47441\%7Pennsylvania 3, 192,31655 \%2, 586,49444 \%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 88445 \%203, 01653 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\% 1, 703,42447\%13Washington1,214,83858\%872,19341#11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
Revised: 64566\% 7Oregon913,53357\%660,47441\%7Pennsylvania 3, 192,31655 \%2, 586,49444 \%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 87745 \%203, 01653 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\% 1, 703,42447\%13Washington1,214,83858\%872,19341#11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
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Original: 64566\% 7Oregon913,53357\%660,47441\%7Pennsylvania 3, 192,31655 \%2, 586,49444 \%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 88445 \%203, 01653 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\% 1, 703,42447\%13Washington1,214,83858\%872,19341#11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
Revised: 64566\% 7Oregon913,53357\%660,47441\%7Pennsylvania 3, 192,31655 \%2, 586,49444 \%21Rhode Island281,20963\%157,31735 \%4South Carolina842,44145\%1,008,72754\%8South Dakota170, 88445 \%203, 00253 \%3Tennessee1,093,21342\%1,487,56457\%11Texas3,521,16444\%4,467,74855\%34Utah301,77134\%555,49763\% 5Vermont203,93767\%96,45632\%3Virginia1,905,51753\% 1, 703,42447\%13Washington1,214,83858\%872,19341#11West Virginia301,43843\%394,27856\%5Wisconsin1,670,47456\%1,258,18143\%10Wyoming80,49633\%160,63966\%
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Original: A boat being sunk by the storm All images: Anonymous101One person has been killed and dozens of boats have been severely damaged or sunk by storms on the Spanish island of Mallorca.
Revised: A boat being sunk by the storm One person has been killed and dozens of boats have been severely damaged or sunk by storms on the Spanish island of Mallorca.
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Original:  The damage to one boat The storms hit the island frequently last week, and the weather finally calmed on Sunday   .
Revised:  The damage to one boat The storms hit the island frequently last week, and the weather finally calmed on Sunday . .
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Original:  The loss of the Boeing 737 killed all 121 people on board   
Revised:  The loss of the Boeing 737 killed all 121 people on board . 
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Original:  After flying on autopilot for two hours the aircraft crashed near Athens despite the efforts of a flight attendant training to become a pilot to take control and save the jet  
Revised:  After flying on autopilot for two hours the aircraft crashed near Athens despite the efforts of a flight attendant training to become a pilot to take control and save the jet . 
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Original: This computer generated image shows the unresponsive aircraft being shadowed by Greek fighter jets The route the fatal flight took Cypriot prosecutors have anounced that they intend to charge five people over the 2005 crash of Helios Airways Flight 522.
Revised: This computer generated image shows the unresponsive aircraft being shadowed by Greek fighter jets Cypriot prosecutors have anounced that they intend to charge five people over the 2005 crash of Helios Airways Flight 522.
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Original:  Attorney General Petros Clerides anounced the plans today  but did not indicate who was to be charged or exactly what the offenses were.
Revised:  Attorney General Petros Clerides announced the plans today but did not indicate who was to be charged or exactly what the offenses were.
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Original:  Attorney General Petros Clerides anounced the plans today  but did not indicate who was to be charged or exactly what the offenses were.
Revised:  Attorney General Petros Clerides anounced the plans today , but did not indicate who was to be charged or exactly what the offenses were.
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