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Original: After the service, Black was  interred in a private ceremony, next to the graves of her parents at the Allerton cemetery , close to the church .
Revised: After the service, Black was interred in a private ceremony, next to the graves of her parents at the Allerton cemetery .
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Original:  On Thursday , North Korea fired artillery rounds aimed at a loudspeaker in South Korea that broadcasts anti- propaganda into the North.
Revised:  Yesterday , North Korea fired artillery rounds aimed at a loudspeaker in South Korea that broadcasts anti- propaganda into the North.
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Original:  They perpetrated such reckless action as firing 36 shells at KPA civil police posts under the absurd pretext that the KPA fired one shell at the south side.
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Original:  Kim Jong-un issued an order of the supreme commander of the Korean People’s Army (KPA) that the front-line large combined units of the KPA should enter a wartime state to be fully battle ready to launch surprise operations , " said KCNA.
Revised:  Kim Jong-un issued an order of the supreme commander of the Korean People’s Army KPA that the front-line large combined units of the KPA should enter a wartime state to be fully battle ready to launch surprise operations , " said KCNA.
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Original:  Kim Jong-un issued an order of the supreme commander of the Korean People’s Army (KPA) that the front-line large combined units of the KPA should enter a wartime state to be fully battle ready to launch surprise operations , " said KCNA.
Revised:  Kim Jong-un issued an order of the supreme commander of the Korean People’s Army (KPA) that the front-line large combined units of the KPA should enter a wartime state to be fully battle ready to launch surprise operations " said KCNA.
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Original: "War maniacs of the south Korean puppet military made another grave provocation to the DPRK in the central western sector of the front on Thursday afternoon.
Revised: "War maniacs of the South Korean puppet military made another grave provocation to the DPRK in the central western sector of the front on Thursday afternoon.
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Original:  and, later, " Kim Jong-un issued an order of the supreme commander of the Korean People’s Army [KPA] that the front-line large combined units of the KPA should enter a wartime state to be fully battle ready to launch surprise operations".
Revised:  and, later, " issued an order of the supreme commander of the Korean People’s Army [KPA] that the front-line large combined units of the KPA should enter a wartime state to be fully battle ready to launch surprise operations".
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Original: According to news agency, quoting 's main news agency (KCNA), the country's military has been placed on high alert and has been told to prepare a "quasi-state of war . "  The report comes after North and exchanged artillery fire yesterday.
Revised: According to news agency, quoting 's main news agency (KCNA), the country's military has been placed on high alert and has been told to prepare a "quasi-state of war " The report comes after North and exchanged artillery fire yesterday.
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Original: According to news agency, quoting 's main news agency (KCNA), the country's military has been placed on high alert and has been told to prepare a "quasi-state of war . "  The report comes after North and exchanged artillery fire yesterday.
Revised: According to news agency, quoting 's main news agency (KCNA), the country's military has been placed on high alert and has been told to prepare a "quasi-state of war . " . The report comes after North and exchanged artillery fire yesterday.
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Original:  "Commanders of the Korean People's Army were hastily dispatched to the front-line troops to command military operations to destroy psychological warfare tools if the enemy does not stop the propaganda broadcast within 48 hours and prepare against the enemy's possible counteractions , "  added KCNA.
Revised:  "Commanders of the Korean People's Army were hastily dispatched to the front-line troops to command military operations to destroy psychological warfare tools if the enemy does not stop the propaganda broadcast within 48 hours and prepare against the enemy's possible counteractions " added KCNA.
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Original:  "Commanders of the Korean People's Army were hastily dispatched to the front-line troops to command military operations to destroy psychological warfare tools if the enemy does not stop the propaganda broadcast within 48 hours and prepare against the enemy's possible counteractions , "  added KCNA.
Revised:  "Commanders of the Korean People's Army were hastily dispatched to the front-line troops to command military operations to destroy psychological warfare tools if the enemy does not stop the propaganda broadcast within 48 hours and prepare against the enemy's possible counteractions , " , added KCNA.
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Original:  Six shells of them hit the area near KPA civil police posts 542 and 543 and other 15 shells fell near KPA civil police posts 250 and 251 ", said KCNA.
Revised:  Six shells of them hit the area near KPA civil police posts 542 and 543 and other 15 shells fell near KPA civil police posts 250 and 251 ," said KCNA.
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Original:  "Foolhardy provocation deserves harsh punishment ", it added;
Revised:  "Foolhardy provocation deserves harsh punishment ," it added;
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Original:  and, later, " issued an order of the supreme commander of the Korean People’s Army [KPA] that the front-line large combined units of the KPA should enter a wartime state to be fully battle ready to launch surprise operations ".
Revised:  and, later, " issued an order of the supreme commander of the Korean People’s Army [KPA] that the front-line large combined units of the KPA should enter a wartime state to be fully battle ready to launch surprise operations ."
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Original:  "Commanders of the Korean People's Army were hastily dispatched to the front-line troops to command military operations to destroy psychological warfare tools if the enemy does not stop the propaganda broadcast within 48 hours and prepare against the enemy's possible counteractions ", added KCNA.
Revised:  "Commanders of the Korean People's Army were hastily dispatched to the front-line troops to command military operations to destroy psychological warfare tools if the enemy does not stop the propaganda broadcast within 48 hours and prepare against the enemy's possible counteractions ," added KCNA.
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Original: Wallace and Gromit sets and props  have been destroyed by fire  only days after the release of the latest Wallace and Gromit film , The Curse Of The Were-Rabbit.
Revised: The sets and props have been destroyed by fire only days after the release of the latest Wallace and Gromit film , The Curse Of The Were-Rabbit.
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Original: Wallace and Gromit sets and props  have been destroyed by fire  only days after the release of the latest Wallace and Gromit film , The Curse Of The Were-Rabbit.
Revised: Wallace and Gromit sets and props have been destroyed by fire The disaster has come only days after the release of the latest Wallace and Gromit film , The Curse Of The Were-Rabbit.
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Original:  The blaze in a warehouse, in BristolUK, broke out in the early hours of Monday October 10, 2005
Revised:  Sets and models from the new film escaped as they had not yet been added to the collection hosted in Bristol
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Original: The disaster has come only days after the US release of Nick Park's latest film featuring the characters, Curse Of The Were-Rabbit.
Revised: The disaster comes only days after the US release of Nick Park's latest film featuring the characters, Curse Of The Were-Rabbit.
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Original: The disaster comes only days after the US release of Nick Park's latest film featuring the characters,  Curse Of The Were-Rabbit.
Revised: The disaster comes only days after the US release of Nick Park's latest film featuring the characters, The Curse Of The Were-Rabbit.
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Original:  for many UK children the appearance of this character in Tony Hart's BBC art programmes was their first introduction to stop-motion animation
Revised:  for many UK children the appearance of this character in Tony Hart's BBC art programmes was their first introduction to stop motion animation
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Original:  for many UK children the appearance of this character in Tony Hart's BBC art programmes was their first introduction to stop motion animation    
Revised:  for many UK children the appearance of this character in Tony Hart's BBC art programmes was their first introduction to stop motion animation . 
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Original:  He has met with passengers including Anglaid .
Revised:  He has met with passengers including Anglade .
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Original:  Some passengers  leapt from the train as it passed through .
Revised:  Some passengers reportedly leapt from the train as it passed through .
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Original:  One Marine was injured , as was a British citizen . French actor was injured slightly by broken glass.
Revised:  One Marine was injured . French actor was injured slightly by broken glass.
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Original:  Eyewitnesses reported the shooting was towards the rear.
Revised:  Reports indicate the shooting was towards the rear.
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Original:  French President Francois Hollande promised that "Everything is being done to shed light on this tragedy."
Revised:  French President Francois Hollande promised "Everything is being done to shed light on this tragedy."
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Original:  " The UK Foreign Office says it is in touch with French officials
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Original: Screenshot of a blocked website The government of Saudi Arabia censored the Web logging softwareBlogger , the photo sharing website Flickr, the diary service LiveJournal, and some other websites through their nationally run Internet Services Unit (ISU) on October 4.
Revised: Screenshot of a blocked website The government of Saudi Arabia censored the Web logging software Blogger , the photo sharing website Flickr, the diary service LiveJournal, and some other websites through their nationally run Internet Services Unit (ISU) on October 4.
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Original:  In September, the popular comedy website The Best Page in the Universe was added to the filter.
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Original:  However, according to activist organization Reporters Without Borders, "blog services applications%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% had not until now been affected by the ISU's filters.
Revised:  However, according to activist organization Reporters Without Borders, "blog services %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% had not until now been affected by the ISU's filters.
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Original:  " Obama said " China has a different political system than we do.
Revised:  China has a different political system than we do.
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Original:  Hu stated that both the United States and China " must respect each other's sovereignty, territorial integrity and development interests.
Revised:  Hu stated that both the United States and China must respect each other's sovereignty, territorial integrity and development interests.
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Original:  " According to CBS News, the Chinese president was in an "unfamiliar setting";
Revised:  According to CBS News, the Chinese president was in an "unfamiliar setting";
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Original:  Hu stated that both the United States and China must respect each other's sovereignty, territorial integrity and development interests.
Revised:  Hu stated that both the China and the United States must appreciate their individual interests.
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Original: Topics included human rights, North Korea, trade between the US and China, and climate change.
Revised: Topics included human rights, trade between the US and China, and climate change.
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Original:  However, upon being asked later, he stated "a lot still needs to be done" with human rights in the county .
Revised:  However, upon being asked later, he stated "a lot still needs to be done" with human rights in the country .
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Original: Members of the Canadian Media Guild voted overwhelmingly to accept a tentative deal with Canadian Broadcast Corporation (CBC) management after a seven-week lockout.
Revised: Members of the Canadian Media Guild voted overwhelmingly to accept a tentative deal with Canadian Broadcast Corporation (CBC) management after a seven week lockout.
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Original:  On 15 August the CBC effectively shut down its English-language programming outside of Fredericton, New Brunswick, and its French-language service outside of Quebec.
Revised:  On 15 August the CBC effectively shut down its English-language programming outside of Fredericton, New Brunswick, and its French language service outside of Quebec.
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Original: File:Stephenbowenv2.jpg|NASA astronaut Steve Bowen (pictured) has been named to replace Tim Kopraon the upcoming STS-133 mission following an injury sustained by Kopra last weekend in a bicycle accident.
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Original:  NASA astronaut Tim Kopra, a crew member on the upcoming STS-133 Space Shuttle mission who was injured over the weekend in a bicycle accident, has been replaced on the crew by astronaut Steve Bowen.
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Original:  Peggy Whitson, chief of NASA'S Astronaut Office, expressed her confidence in Bowen in a statement released by NASA: " Steve%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% has performed five prior spacewalks.
Revised:  Peggy Whitson, chief of NASA'S Astronaut Office, expressed her confidence in Bowen in a statement released by NASA: " %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% has performed five prior spacewalks.
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Original:  Bowen will begin training for STS-133 along with fellow crew members Steven Lindsey, Eric Boe, Alvin Drew, Michael Barratt, and Nicole Stott later on this week.
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Original:  This crew change is part of a series of ongoing issues with the upcoming STS-133 mission, the final flight of the Space Shuttle Discovery, including technical problems with Discovery's external fuel tank.
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Original: NASA astronaut Tim Kopra, a crew member on the upcoming STS-133 Space Shuttle mission  who was injured over the weekend in a bicycle accident, has been replaced on the crew by astronaut Steve Bowen . Kopra's duties of lead spacewalker on the crew of STS-133 will be transmitted to Bowen, veteran of two previous spaceflights, STS-126 and STS-132.
Revised: NASA astronaut Tim Kopra, a crew member on the upcoming STS-133 Space Shuttle mission , who was injured over the weekend in a bicycle accident, has been replaced on the crew by astronaut Steve Bowen . Kopra's duties of lead spacewalker on the crew of STS-133 will be transmitted to Bowen, veteran of two previous spaceflights, STS-126 and STS-132.
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Original: NASA astronaut Tim Kopra, a crew member on the upcoming STS-133 Space Shuttle mission  who was injured over the weekend in a bicycle accident, has been replaced on the crew by astronaut Steve Bowen . Kopra's duties of lead spacewalker on the crew of STS-133 will be transmitted to Bowen, veteran of two previous spaceflights, STS-126 and STS-132.
Revised: NASA astronaut Tim Kopra, a crew member on the upcoming STS-133 Space Shuttle mission who was injured over the weekend in a bicycle accident, has been replaced . Astronaut Steve Bowen will be taking his place . Kopra's duties of lead spacewalker on the crew of STS-133 will be transmitted to Bowen, veteran of two previous spaceflights, STS-126 and STS-132.
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Original:  Peggy Whitson, chief of NASA'S Astronaut Office, expressed her confidence in Bowen in a statement released by NASA: "[Steve] has performed five prior spacewalks.
Revised:  Peggy Whitson, chief of NASA'S Astronaut Office, expressed her confidence in Bowen saying, "[Steve] has performed five prior spacewalks.
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Original:  She does note, however, that Kopra could possibly rejoin the crew if the launch date of STS-133 were to "slip significantly ". Currently, the mission is scheduled to launch to the International Space Station on February 24.
Revised:  She does note, however, that Kopra could possibly rejoin the crew if the launch date of STS-133 were to "slip significantly ." Currently, the mission is scheduled to launch to the International Space Station on February 24.
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Original: Yahoo  announced in its blog Sunday the beginning of a public beta test of its new Podcast search service.
Revised: Yahoo ! announced in its blog Sunday the beginning of a public beta test of its new Podcast search service.
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Original:  Yahoo  is the first the large web company to offer a podcast search services.
Revised:  Yahoo ! is the first the large web company to offer a podcast search services.
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Original:  “This is something we’ve been working on for a while, it’s a great way for people to find, listen to, and consume podcasts as they grow more popular.” said Yahoo spokesperson Meagan Busat 
Revised:  “This is something we’ve been working on for a while, it’s a great way for people to find, listen to, and consume podcasts as they grow more popular.” said Yahoo ! spokesperson Meagan Busath. 
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Original: In addition, an Ipsos/Associated Press poll of 1,000 Americans showed that 47\% of those polled have a "strong disapproval" of the events taken by George W. Bush during the war, compared to 21\% who "strongly approve".
Revised: In addition, an Ipsos/Associated Press poll of 1,000 Americans showed that 47\% of those polled have a "strong disapproval" of the way George W. Bush during the war, compared to 21\% who "strongly approve".
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Original:  The Iraqi national referendum on their draft constitution is scheduled to be put to vote this Saturday, October 15.
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Original: A CBS opinion poll has reported that 55\% of Americans are not favoring the United States' position in the War in Iraq.
Revised: A CBS opinion poll has reported that 55\% of Americans disapprove of the United States' position in the War in Iraq.
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Original:  the Iraqi government met on Monday with the intention to strip Shaalan of the immunity he is afforded as a MP. This action failed as the parliament did not have a quorum  
Revised:  the Iraqi government met on Monday with the intention to strip Shaalan of the immunity he is afforded as a MP. This action failed as the parliament did not have a quorum . 
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Original:  the Iraqi government met on Monday with the intention to strip Shaalan of the immunity he is afforded as a MP . This action failed as the parliament did not have a quorum.
Revised:  the Iraqi government met on Monday with the intention to strip Shaalan of the immunity he is afforded as a Legislator . This action failed as the parliament did not have a quorum.
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Original:  Police Superintendent Jane Derrick said last night  " " At this time we are continuing to search[...] It is possible that tonight and tomorrow we are going to find more bodies at the scene."
Revised:  Police Superintendent Jane Derrick said last night , " " At this time we are continuing to search[...] It is possible that tonight and tomorrow we are going to find more bodies at the scene."
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Original:  Police Superintendent Jane Derrick said last night  " " At this time we are continuing to search[...] It is possible that tonight and tomorrow we are going to find more bodies at the scene."
Revised:  Police Superintendent Jane Derrick said last night " At this time we are continuing to search[...] It is possible that tonight and tomorrow we are going to find more bodies at the scene."
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Original:  In 2012 English entrepreneur Graham Peacock bought it for around £ 65,000.
Revised:  In 2012 English entrepreneur Graham Peacock bought it for around 65,000.
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Original:  Tina Tilley, head of the local chamber of commerce, was at the show ans said "From where we were we could see the jet came down very low and looked like it was going to scoop up – but it didn't.
Revised:  Tina Tilley, head of the local chamber of commerce, was at the show ans said "From where we were we could see the jet came down very low and looked like it was going to scoop up — but it didn't.
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Original:  Earlier this year a pilot was killed when his plane crashed during an aerial display a in England.
Revised:  Earlier this year a pilot was killed when his plane crashed during an aerial display at in England.
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Original:  Motorist Dom Lawson, whose car was narrowly missed, said "It was like something out of . "  The road closure left thousands trapped at the scene as they could not remove their cars.
Revised:  Motorist Dom Lawson, whose car was narrowly missed, said "It was like something out of " The road closure left thousands trapped at the scene as they could not remove their cars.
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Original:  Motorist Dom Lawson, whose car was narrowly missed, said "It was like something out of . "  The road closure left thousands trapped at the scene as they could not remove their cars.
Revised:  Motorist Dom Lawson, whose car was narrowly missed, said "It was like something out of . " . The road closure left thousands trapped at the scene as they could not remove their cars.
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Original:  One of the German pilots escaped but the other was killed.
Revised:  One of the pilots escaped but the other was killed.
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Original: Wikinews spoke to Katrine Williams, one of the representatives of the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS), and a member of the Civil Service since 1991, to establish the grievances leading to what may be the UK's first public-sector strike since the current coalition government took office . Balloted in December, over 70\% of PCS members voted in favour of strike action;
Revised: Wikinews spoke to Katrine Williams, one of the representatives of the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS), and a member of the Civil Service since 1991, to establish the grievances leading to the public-sector strike since the current coalition government took office . Balloted in December, over 70\% of PCS members voted in favour of strike action;
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Original: Wikinews spoke to Katrine Williams, one of the representatives of the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS), and a member of the Civil Service since 1991, to establish the grievances leading to what may be the UK's first public-sector strike since the current coalition government took office . Balloted in December, over 70\% of PCS members voted in favour of strike action;
Revised: Wikinews spoke to Katrine Williams, one of the representatives of the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS), and a member of the Civil Service since 1991, to establish the grievances leading to what may be the UK's first public-sector strike . Balloted in December, over 70\% of PCS members voted in favour of strike action;
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Original:  Williams expressed concern that, with many claimants  it took longer than this to simply establish what the issue was for a member of the public calling in.
Revised:  Williams expressed concern that, with many claimants , it took longer than this to simply establish what the issue was for a member of the public calling in.
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