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Revised:  Australia has some of the toughest policies in the world against refugee arrivals. Many say these policies have helped conservative Prime Minister John Howard win four straight elections. The policies include the mandatory detention of illegal arrivals, illegal workers and people who overstay their visas in detention camps, often for years while their cases are heard. 
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Revised:  The landmark case could open the way for litigation by other families whose children suffered under the policy of mandatory detention. 
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Revised:  She rejected any claim the Government should be congratulated for offering the settlement: "To have gone through these proceedings, and spent the amount of money they have spent, to put Shayan's mother in the witness box for two weeks, is not an indication of a willingness and public accountability by the Government to accept responsibility for their actions," Senator Nettle said. 
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Revised:  "The problems that Shayan experienced were systemic problems rather than ones that were just specific to him, although the particular treatment that he received was disgraceful," she said. 
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Revised:  "So it's quite possible that there are other children or even adults out there who lived in a similar environment during that time in immigration detention and possibly have similar problems." 
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Revised:  She says she hopes the systemic problems highlighted in the case will now be addressed. 
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Revised:  "I can only hope that the Government takes notice of this and doesn't continue to spend taxpayer money on having to compensate people for treating them in a disgraceful way in immigration detention."
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Original: An Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 , who suffered psychological injuries during his time in an Australian immigration detention centre will receive a Federal Government payout.
Revised:  Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 , who suffered psychological injuries during his time in an Australian immigration detention centre will receive a Federal Government payout.
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Original: An Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 , who suffered psychological injuries during his time in an Australian immigration detention centre will receive a Federal Government payout.
Revised: An Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 - who suffered psychological injuries during his time in an Australian immigration detention centre will receive a Federal Government payout.
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Original: An Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 , who suffered psychological injuries during his time in an Australian immigration detention centre will receive a Federal Government payout.
Revised: An Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 , who suffered psychological injuries during his time in an Australian immigration detention centres - will receive a Federal Government payout.
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Original:  The Federal Government has agreed to pay $400,000 in compensation to the family.
Revised:  The government has agreed to pay $400,000 in compensation to the family.
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Original:       The Department of Immigration said the agreement was "no admission of guilt".
Revised:  "They're looking forward to living a normal life in the community. The settlement will enable the treatment he needs to somehow rectify the damage done in the detention centres. The fact the Government has settled the case indicates a serious concern on their part they were going to be found guilty of negligence," she said. "I can only hope that the government takes notice of this and doesn't continue to spend taxpayer money on having to compensate people for treating them in a disgraceful way in immigration detention," Gilsenan told reporters. The Department of Immigration said the agreement was "no admission of guilt".
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Original:  Immigration Minister Amanda Vanstone says she does not believe a $400,000 payout for an Iranian boy traumatised after being locked up in immigration detention is a backdown.
Revised:  Immigration Minister Amanda Vanstone says she does not believe a $400,000 is a backdown.
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Original:  Senator Vanstone said on Sunday an offer was made to the Badraie family's lawyer some time ago but they turned it down.
Revised:  Vanstone said an offer was made to the Badraie family's lawyer some time ago but they turned it down.
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Original:  She said she did not see the payout as a backdown but as a better result for all those involved.
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Original:  The policies include the mandatory detention of illegal arrivals, illegal workers and people who overstay their visas in detention camps , often for yearswhile their cases are heard.
Revised:  The policies include the mandatory detention of boat arrivals, illegal workers and people who overstay their visas in detention camps , often for yearswhile their cases are heard.
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Original:  The camps have been condemned by  international human rights groups.
Revised:  The camps have been condemned by many international human rights groups.
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Original:  The government released the last 42 children from detention centres last July after an internal revolt against Howard's tough stance.
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Original:  The landmark case could open the way for litigation by other families whose children suffered under the policy of mandatory detention.
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Original:  Greens senator Kerry Nettle said that "hundreds of children have been mentally scarred by their time in immigration detention and further claims are planned."
Revised:  Greens senator Kerry Nettle says "hundreds of children have been mentally scarred by their time in immigration detention and further claims are planned."
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Original:  Senator Nettle blamed the Federal Government's policy of mandatory detention.
Revised:  She blames the Federal Government's policy of mandatory detention.
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Original:  It says the boy witnessed suicide attempts and acts of violence at the Woomera and Villawood facilities between 2000 and 2002.
Revised:  The landmark case could open the way for litigation by other families whose children suffered under the policy of mandatory detention.
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Original:  Lawyer Rebecca Gilsenan says the outcome sets a precedent for other detainees. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The problems that Shayan experienced were systemic problems rather than ones that were just specific to him, although the particular treatment that he received was disgraceful,"
Revised:  Gilsenan says the outcome sets a precedent for other detainees. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The problems that Shayan experienced were systemic problems rather than ones that were just specific to him, although the particular treatment that he received was disgraceful,"
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Original: Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 - who suffered psychological injuries from his time inside the razor wire and bars of Australian immigration detention centres - will receive a Federal Government payout.
Revised: Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 - who suffered psychological injuries from time spent inside the razor wire and bars of Australian immigration detention centres - will receive a Federal Government payout.
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Original:  The Badraie family's   lawyer, Rebecca Gilsenan, said they were elated at the outcome: "They're looking forward to living a normal life in the community.
Revised:  The Badraie family's The Badraie family's lawyer, Rebecca Gilsenan, said they were elated at the outcome: "They're looking forward to living a normal life in the community.
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Original:  The fact the Government has settled the case indicates a serious concern on their part they were going to be found guilty of negligence," she said . "I can only hope that the government takes notice of this and doesn't continue to spend taxpayer money on having to compensate people for treating them in a disgraceful way in immigration detention," Gilsenan told reporters.
Revised:  The fact the Government has settled the case indicates a serious concern on their part they were going to be found guilty of negligence," Gilsenan told reporters . "I can only hope that the government takes notice of this and doesn't continue to spend taxpayer money on having to compensate people for treating them in a disgraceful way in immigration detention," Gilsenan told reporters.
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Original:  The fact the Government has settled the case indicates a serious concern on their part they were going to be found guilty of negligence," she said . "I can only hope that the government takes notice of this and doesn't continue to spend taxpayer money on having to compensate people for treating them in a disgraceful way in immigration detention," Gilsenan told reporters.
Revised:  The fact the Government has settled the case indicates a serious concern on their part they were going to be found guilty of negligence," she said . "I can only hope that the government takes notice of this and doesn't continue to spend taxpayer money on having to compensate people for treating them in a disgraceful way in immigration detention," 
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Original:  They were sent to the mothballed Woomera detention centre .
Revised:  They were sent to the (now mothballed) Woomera detention centre .
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Original:  During his 17 months in detention , Shayan stopped  eating and speaking and was often moved to Westmead Hospital for rehydration after periods of not consuming food or water . During the 15-week case, the court heard evidence from former senior immigration official Philippa Godwin that detention could damage the mental health of refugees , directly contradicting the Government's claims the centres were safe.
Revised:  During his 17 months incarceration , Shayan stopped eating and speaking and was often moved to Westmead Hospital for rehydration after periods of not consuming food or water . During the 15-week case, the court heard evidence from former senior immigration official Philippa Godwin that detention could damage the mental health of refugees , directly contradicting the Government's claims the centres were safe.
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Original:  During his 17 months in detention , Shayan stopped  eating and speaking and was often moved to Westmead Hospital for rehydration after periods of not consuming food or water . During the 15-week case, the court heard evidence from former senior immigration official Philippa Godwin that detention could damage the mental health of refugees , directly contradicting the Government's claims the centres were safe.
Revised:  During his 17 months in detention , Shayan stopped eating and speaking . During the 15-week case, the court heard evidence from former senior immigration official Philippa Godwin that detention could damage the mental health of refugees , directly contradicting the Government's claims the centres were safe.
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Original:  During his 17 months in detention , Shayan stopped  eating and speaking and was often moved to Westmead Hospital for rehydration after periods of not consuming food or water . During the 15-week case, the court heard evidence from former senior immigration official Philippa Godwin that detention could damage the mental health of refugees , directly contradicting the Government's claims the centres were safe.
Revised:  During his 17 months in detention , Shayan stopped eating and speaking and was often moved to Westmead Hospital for rehydration after periods of not consuming food or water . During the 15-week case, the court heard evidence from former senior immigration official Philippa Godwin that detention could damage the mental health of refugees - directly contradicting the Government's claims the centres were safe.
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Original:  "There is a raft of children, we are talking hundreds of children ... and adults who have had their mental health significantly impacted by the policy of mandatory detention.
Revised:  "There is a raft of children, we are talking hundreds of children , and adults, who have had their mental health significantly impacted by the policy of mandatory detention.
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Original:  Some of those are looking to see whether or not they wish to pursue action but none of them have made the decision to take that step to this point.
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Original:  " She rejected any claim the Government should be congratulated for offering the settlement: "To have gone through these proceedings, and spent the amount of money they have spent, to put Shayan's mother in the witness box for two weeks, is not an indication of a willingness and public accountability by the Government to accept responsibility for their actions," Senator Nettle said.
Revised:  " She rejected that the Government should be congratulated for offering the settlement: "To have gone through these proceedings, and spent the amount of money they have spent, to put Shayan's mother in the witness box for two weeks, is not an indication of a willingness and public accountability by the Government to accept responsibility for their actions," Senator Nettle said.
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Original:   Gilsenan says the   outcome sets a precedent for other detainees.
Revised:  Rebecca Gilsenan says the outcome sets a precedent for other detainees.
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Original:   Gilsenan says the   outcome sets a precedent for other detainees.
Revised:  Gilsenan says the Gilsenan says the outcome sets a precedent for other detainees.
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Original:  " The Government will also pay several million dollars in legal costs incurred by the family and by the operators of the Woomera detention centre
Revised:  The Government will also pay several million dollars in legal costs incurred by the family and by the operators of the Woomera detention centre
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Original:  " The Government will also pay several million dollars in legal costs incurred by the family and by the operators of the Woomera detention centre
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Original:  Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 - who suffered psychological injuries from time spent inside the razor wire and bars of Australian immigration detention centres - will receive a Federal Government payout .
Revised:  Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, who suffers psychological injuries from time spent inside the razor wire and bars of Australian immigration detention centres - will receive a Federal Government payout .
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Original:  Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 - who suffered psychological injuries from time spent inside the razor wire and bars of Australian immigration detention centres - will receive a Federal Government payout .
Revised:  Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 - who suffered psychological injuries from time spent inside Australia's immigration detention centres - will receive a Federal Government payout .
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Original:  Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 - who suffered psychological injuries from time spent inside the razor wire and bars of Australian immigration detention centres - will receive a Federal Government payout .
Revised:  Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, 11 - who suffered psychological injuries from time spent inside the razor wire and bars of Australian immigration detention centres , will receive a Federal Government payout .
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Original:  The family were incarcerated at Villawood Detention Centre in Sydney, and the Woomera Detention Facility, a remote desert camp in outback South Australia , between 2000 and 2002.
Revised:  The family were incarcerated behind the razorwire of the the Woomera Detention Facility, a remote desert camp in outback South Australia , between 2000 and 2002.
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Original:  Badraie's family lawyer, Rebecca Gilsenan, said  " they're looking forward to living a normal life in the community.
Revised:  Badraie's family lawyer, Rebecca Gilsenan, said the family are " they're looking forward to living a normal life in the community.
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Original:  Badraie's family lawyer, Rebecca Gilsenan, said  " they're looking forward to living a normal life in the community.
Revised:  Badraie's family lawyer, Rebecca Gilsenan, said " looking forward to living a normal life in the community.
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Original:  These policies include the mandatory detention of boat arrivals, illegal workers and people who overstay their visas in detention camps under harsh conditions.
Revised:  Policies include immediate mandatory detention of boat arrivals, illegal workers and people who overstay their visas in detention camps under harsh conditions.
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Original:  These policies include the mandatory detention of boat arrivals, illegal workers and people who overstay their visas in detention camps under harsh conditions.
Revised:  These policies include the mandatory detention of boat arrivals, illegal workers and people who overstay their visas are sent to detention camps under harsh conditions.
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Original:  The detainees are often in limbo, in some instances up to 6 years , while cases are being heard.
Revised:  Immigration detainees often languish in limbo with some up to 6 years , while cases are being heard.
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Original:  The detainees are often in limbo, in some instances up to 6 years , while cases are being heard.
Revised:  The detainees are often in limbo, in some instances up to 6 years while their cases are being heard.
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Original:  The camps have been condemned by many international human rights groups.
Revised:  These camps have been condemned by many international human rights groups.
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Original:  She rejected that the Government should be congratulated for offering the settlement: "To have gone through these proceedings, and spent the amount of money they have spent, to put Shayan's mother in the witness box for two weeks, is not an indication of a willingness and public accountability by the Government to accept responsibility for their actions," Senator Nettle said.
Revised:  She rejected that the Government deserve congratulations for offering the settlement: "To have gone through these proceedings, and spent the amount of money they have spent, to put Shayan's mother in the witness box for two weeks, is not an indication of a willingness and public accountability by the Government to accept responsibility for their actions," Senator Nettle said.
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Original:   Rebecca Gilsenan says the landmark case may pave the way for more litigation by other refugee families.
Revised:  Lawyer Rebecca Gilsenan says the landmark case may pave the way for more litigation by other refugee families.
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Original: Eleven year old Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, who suffers psychological injuries from  time spent inside Australia's immigration detention centres, will receive a Federal Government payout of $400,000 in compensation.
Revised: Eleven year old Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, who suffers psychological injuries from his time spent inside Australia's immigration detention centres, will receive a Federal Government payout of $400,000 in compensation.
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Original:  Shayan, his father and stepmother arrived in Australia in 2000, and  sent immediately to the notorious Woomera  camp.
Revised:  Shayan, his father and stepmother arrived in Australia in 2000, and were sent immediately to the notorious Woomera camp.
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Original:  During the 15-week case, the court heard evidence from former senior immigration official Philippa Godwin that detention could damage the mental health of refugees - directly contradicting the Government's claims the centres were safe.
Revised:  The court heard evidence from former senior immigration official Philippa Godwin that detention could damage the mental health of refugees - directly contradicting the Government's claims the centres were safe.
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Original:  Compared with other similar countires, Australia has some of the toughest policies in the world against refugee arrivals.
Revised:  Compared with similar countires, Australia has some of the toughest policies in the world against refugee arrivals.
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Original:  She rejected that the  Government deserve congratulations for offering the settlement: "To have gone through these proceedings, and spent the amount of money they have spent, to put Shayan's mother in the witness box for two weeks, is not an indication of a willingness and public accountability by the Government to accept responsibility for their actions," Senator Nettle said.
Revised:  She rejected that the Government deserve congratulations over settlement: "To have gone through these proceedings, and spent the amount of money they have spent, to put Shayan's mother in the witness box for two weeks, is not an indication of a willingness and public accountability by the Government to accept responsibility for their actions," Senator Nettle said.
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Original: Eleven year old Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, who suffers psychological injuries from his time spent inside Australia's immigration detention centres, will receive a Federal Government payout of $400,000 in compensation.
Revised: Eleven year old Iranian refugee boy, Shayan Badraie, who suffered psychological injuries during his time spent inside Australia's immigration detention centres, will receive a Federal Government payout of $400,000 in compensation.
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Original:  In 2001, video footage of his condition was smuggled out of Villawood, inciting national debate over Prime Minister John Howard's controversial policy of detaining children in detention .
Revised:  In 2001, video footage of his condition was smuggled out of Villawood, inciting national debate over Prime Minister John Howard's controversial policy of detaining children .
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Original: Helsinki, Finland The Finnish trade union for bus and truck drivers has gone on strike on Sunday evening, mainly over the use of part-time labor.
Revised: In Helsinki, the Finnish trade union for bus and truck drivers has gone on strike on Sunday evening, mainly over the use of part-time labor.
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Original:  " Category:New Zealand Category:Ocean
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Original:  " Category:New Zealand Category:Ocean
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Original:  If the person still doesn't fill out the form, the ongoing cost is $20 a day until they do.  
Revised:  If the person still doesn't fill out the form, the ongoing cost is $20 a day until they do. " 
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Original: Wikipedia founder and President Jimmy Wales has said that he's considering a "stable" edition of the community-edited encyclopedia, according to an interview with the Toronto Star.
Revised: Wikipedia founder Jimmy Wales has said that he's considering a "stable" edition of the community-edited encyclopedia, according to an interview with the Toronto Star.
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Original:  The edition would be "a body of work" that has already "been through the community-review process," he proposed. can anyone do this?
Revised:  The edition would be "a body of work" that has already "been through the community-review process," he proposed. 
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Original: With regard to whether this would hurt the democratic spirit of Wikipedia, Wales responded " Uhhmmm, no , not really.
Revised: With regard to whether this would hurt the democratic spirit of Wikipedia, Wales responded " No , not really.
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