wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  embolismembolism of air bubblesAmniotic fluid embolismembolism of amniotic fluid, foetal cells, hair, or other debris that enters the mother's bloodstream via the placental bed of the uterus and triggers an allergic reactionTissue embolismembolism of small fragments of tissueForeign body embolismembolism of foreign materials such as talc and other small objectsSeptic embolismembolism of bacteria-containing pus In thromboembolism, the thrombus (blood clot)
Revised:  embolismembolism of air bubblesRareAmniotic fluid embolismembolism of amniotic fluid, foetal cells, hair, or other debris that enters the mother's bloodstream via the placental bed of the uterus and triggers an allergic reactionTissue embolismembolism of small fragments of tissueForeign body embolismembolism of foreign materials such as talc and other small objectsSeptic embolismembolism of bacteria-containing pus In thromboembolism, the thrombus (blood clot)
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Original:  embolismembolism of air bubblesAmniotic fluid embolismembolism of amniotic fluid, foetal cells, hair, or other debris that enters the mother's bloodstream via the placental bed of the uterus and triggers an allergic reactionTissue embolismembolism of small fragments of tissueForeign body embolismembolism of foreign materials such as talc and other small objectsSeptic embolismembolism of bacteria-containing pus In thromboembolism, the thrombus (blood clot)
Revised:  embolismembolism of air bubblesAmniotic fluid embolismembolism of amniotic fluid, foetal cells, hair, or other debris that enters the mother's bloodstream via the placental bed of the uterus and triggers an allergic reactionVery RareTissue embolismembolism of small fragments of tissueForeign body embolismembolism of foreign materials such as talc and other small objectsSeptic embolismembolism of bacteria-containing pus In thromboembolism, the thrombus (blood clot)
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Original: The term is distinct from embolism and thromboembolism, which may be consequences of an embolus, as discussed URL Embolism by other materials is rare.
Revised: The term is distinct from embolism and thromboembolism, which may be consequences of an embolus, as discussed below. Embolism by other materials is rare.
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Original:  Bullet embolism occurs in approximately 0.3\% cases of gunshot URL Amniotic-fluid embolism is a rare complication of childbirth.
Revised:  Bullet embolism occurs in approximately 0.3\% cases of gunshot wounds. Amniotic-fluid embolism is a rare complication of childbirth.
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Original: A thrombus, more commonly known as a Cassandra. colloquially called a blood clot, is the final product of the blood coagulation step in hemostasis.
Revised: A thrombus, colloquially called a blood clot, is the final product of the blood coagulation step in hemostasis.
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Original: Treatment and Symptoms of Blood Clots -- MDhealthnetwork.org, Medical Information Resource, 1999 North American Thrombosis Forum - NATF is a nonprofit organization dedicated to promoting thrombosis research, prevention and education, public policy, and advocacy outreach.
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Original:  He had authored his fiqhi resalah named Wasael-ush-Sharia in Urdu, and the famous Urdu book Tuhfa-tul-Awam on Jafari fiqh was largely based on it.
Revised:  He had authored his fiqhi resalah named Wasael-ush-Sharia in Urdu, and the famous Urdu book Tohfat-ul-Awam on Jafari fiqh was largely based on it.
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Original: Azor LeBlanc (October 27 1927 – ) is a former business owner and political figure in New Brunswick, Canada.
Revised: Azor LeBlanc (October 27 1927 ) is a former business owner and political figure in New Brunswick, Canada.
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Original:  Joseph's College alumni Category: New Brunswick businesspeople Category:New Brunswick Liberal Association MLAs Category:Canadian Roman Catholics Category:People from Westmorland County, New Brunswick Category:Acadian peop
Revised:  Joseph's College alumni Category: Businesspeople from New Brunswick Category:New Brunswick Liberal Association MLAs Category:Canadian Roman Catholics Category:People from Westmorland County, New Brunswick Category:Acadian peop
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Original: LeBlanc died at the Dr. Georges-L.-Dumont University Hospital Centre in Moncton, New Brunswick on July 31, 2011, after a battle with cancer spanning 33 years.
Revised: LeBlanc died at the Dr. Georges-L.-Dumont University Hospital Centre in Moncton, New Brunswick on July 31, 2011, after suffering from cancer for 33 years.
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Original: Allan E. Maher (  February 16, 1938 – ) is a former funeral director and political figure in New Brunswick, Canada.
Revised: Allan E. Maher ( February 16, 1938 ) is a former funeral director and political figure in New Brunswick, Canada.
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Original:  Maher went on to serve as chairman for the board of governors for the New Brunswick Sports Hall of FameNew Brunswick Sports Hall of Fame In 2012-2013, he was co-chair of the New Brunswick Electoral Boundaries Commission.
Revised:  Maher went on to serve as chairman for the board of governors for the New Brunswick Sports Hall of Fame In 2012-2013, he was co-chair of the New Brunswick Electoral Boundaries Commission.
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Original:  Named after Alberto Busnari. j MannaA strength move pressing with the hands where the legs and hips are raised until the hips are above the shoulders and the legs are parallel to the floor.
Revised:  Named after Alberto Busnari. M Manna A strength move pressing with the hands where the legs and hips are raised until the hips are above the shoulders and the legs are parallel to the floor.
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Original:   HB The scoring abbreviation for horizontal (or high) bar.
Revised:  Hanging position Initial position of the gymnasts before the exercise. Only on still rings and horizontal bar, the gymnast is guaranteed the right to be assisted to the hanging position by a coach or gymnast. HB The scoring abbreviation for horizontal (or high) bar.
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Original: Key foundational work, that developed in to Internet Studies , is found in studies of the Information Society and the Network Society  by scholars such as Manuel Castells, Mark Poster, Frank Webster, etc.
Revised: Key foundational work, that developed in to Internet Studies has been pursued by a number of scholars. Studies of the Information Society and the Network Society by scholars such as Manuel Castells, Mark Poster, Frank Webster, etc.
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Original:  Other important authors are Sherry Turkle and Robert Kraut  for their socio-psychological contributions ;
Revised:  Sherry Turkle and Robert Kraut for their socio-psychological contributions ;
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Original:  Other important authors are Sherry Turkle and Robert Kraut  for their socio-psychological contributions ;
Revised:  Other important authors are Sherry Turkle and Robert Kraut for their socio-psychological contributions . Janet
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Original:  Abbate and Patrice Flichy  for their socio-historical research;
Revised:  Abbate and Patrice Flichy are recognized for their socio-historical research;
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Original:  Studies of the Information Society and the Network Society have been pursued by scholars such as Manuel Castells, Mark Poster, Frank Webster, etc .
Revised:  Studies of the Information Society and the Network Society have been pursued by scholars such as Manuel Castells, Mark Poster, and Frank Webster .
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Original: Clothing terminology ranges from the arcane (watchet, a pale blue color name from the 16th century) to the everyday (t-shirt), and changes over time in response to fashion which in turn reflects social, artistic, and political trends.
Revised: Clothing terminology ranges from the arcane (watchet, a pale blue color name from the 16th century) (t-shirt), and changes over time in response to fashion which in turn reflects social, artistic, and political trends.
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Original:  A notable trend at the turn of the 21st century is "cute" short forms: camisole becomes cami, hooded sweaters or sweatshirts become hoodies, and as of 2005, short or "shrunken" cardigans are cardies.
Revised:  A notab le trend at the turn of the 21st century is "cute" short forms: camisole becomes cami, hooded sweaters or sweatshirts become hoodies, and as of 2005, short or "shrunken" cardigans are cardies.
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Original: Clothing terminology comprises the names of individual garments and classes of garments, as well as the specialized vocabularies of the trades that have designed, manufactured, marketed and sold clothing over hundreds of years.
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Original:  sloper, toile Methods of manufacture: haute couture, bespoke tailoring, ready-to-wear Retailers' terms: Size ranges: Small, Medium, Large, XL (Extra Large), XXL (Double Extra Large), Junior, Misses,  Plus Size, Big-and-Tall Retail seasons: back-to-school, holiday, resort, seasonal Departments: special occasion, sportswear, bridge fashion Degrees of formality: formal wear, bridal, business casual Market: high end, high street, ethical consumer, cut price
Revised:  sloper, toile Methods of manufacture: haute couture, bespoke tailoring, ready-to-wear Retailers' terms: Size ranges: Small, Medium, Large, XL (Extra Large), XXL (Double Extra Large), Junior, Misses, Petite, Plus Size, Big-and-Tall Retail seasons: back-to-school, holiday, resort, seasonal Departments: special occasion, sportswear, bridge fashion Degrees of formality: formal wear, bridal, business casual Market: high end, high street, ethical consumer, cut price
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Original: = Physiology It occurs at the beginning of the middle third of diastole, approximately 0.12 to 0.18 seconds after S2.
Revised:  Physiology It occurs at the beginning of the middle third of diastole, approximately 0.12 to 0.18 seconds after S2.
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Original:  Depending on the aetiology the gallop rhythm may resolve spontaneously.
Revised:  Depending on the etiology the gallop rhythm may resolve spontaneously.
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Original:  One may also use the phrase "Slosh’-ing-IN" to help with the cadence ( SLOSH S1, -ing S2, -in S3), as well as the pathology of the S3 sound, or any other number of local variants.
Revised:  One may also use the phrase "Slosh’-ing-IN" to help with the cadence ( Slosh S1, -ing S2, -in S3), as well as the pathology of the S3 sound, or any other number of local variants.
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Original:  The approach is based on parabiosis studies such as  Irina Conboy has done on mice, but Conboy says young blood does not reverse aging (even in mice) and that those who offer those treatments have misunderstood her research.
Revised:  The approach is based on parabiosis studies such as those Irina Conboy has done on mice, but Conboy says young blood does not reverse aging (even in mice) and that those who offer those treatments have misunderstood her research.
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Original:   David Sinclair says: "I don't see aging as a disease, but as a collection of quite predictable diseases caused by the deterioration of the body".
Revised:  Biologist David Sinclair says: "I don't see aging as a disease, but as a collection of quite predictable diseases caused by the deterioration of the body".
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Original: The fourth heart sound or S4 is a rare extra heart sound that occurs during late diastole, immediately before the normal two "lub-dub" heart sounds (S1 and S2).
Revised: The fourth heart sound or S4 is an extra heart sound that occurs during late diastole, immediately before the normal two "lub-dub" heart sounds (S1 and S2).
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Original:  It will become more apparent with exercise, with the patient lying on their left-hand side, or with the patient holding expiration.
Revised:  It will become more apparent with exercise, with the patient lying on the left-hand side, or with the patient holding expiration.
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Original:  If the culprit is the right ventricle, the abnormal sound will be most evident on the lower left hand side of the sternum and will get louder with exercise and quick, deep inspiration.
Revised:  If the problem is in the right ventricle, the abnormal sound will be most evident on the lower left hand side of the sternum and will get louder with exercise and quick, deep inspiration.
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Original: This produces a rhythm classically compared to the cadence of the word "Tennessee."clinical examination A systemic guide to physical URL One can also use the phrase "A-stiff-wall" to help with the cadence (a S4, stiff S1, wall S2), as well as the pathology of the S4 sound.
Revised: This produces a rhythm classically compared to the cadence of the word "Tennessee."clinical examination A systemic guide to physical diagnosis One can also use the phrase "A-stiff-wall" to help with the cadence (a S4, stiff S1, wall S2), as well as the pathology of the S4 sound.
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Original:  The S4 sound occurs, by definition, immediately before S1, while the atria of the heart are vigorously URL It is manifest as a vibration of 20 to 30 Hz within the ventricle.
Revised:  The S4 sound occurs, by definition, immediately before S1, while the atria of the heart are vigorously contracting. It is manifest as a vibration of 20 to 30 Hz within the ventricle.
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Original: Kenneth Robert Tuff "Ken" Baumann (born August 8, 1989) is an American actor, writer, publisher and book designer.
Revised: Kenneth Robert Tuff Baumann (born August 8, 1989) is an American actor, writer, publisher and book designer.
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Original:  The Jazz made back-to-back appearances in the NBA Finals in 1997 and 1998, with Ostertag providing strong defense in the playoffs against the likes of Hakeem Olajuwon, David Robinson, Tim Duncan, and Shaquille O'Neal  .
Revised:  The Jazz made back-to-back appearances in the NBA Finals in 1997 and 1998, with Ostertag providing strong defense in the playoffs against the likes of Hakeem Olajuwon, David Robinson, Tim Duncan, and Shaquille O'Neal <ref> .
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Original:  The Jazz made back-to-back appearances in the NBA Finals in 1997 and 1998, with Ostertag providing strong defense in the playoffs against the likes of Hakeem Olajuwon, David Robinson, Tim Duncan, and Shaquille O'Neal <ref> .
Revised:  The Jazz made back-to-back appearances in the NBA Finals in 1997 and 1998, with Ostertag providing strong defense in the playoffs against the likes of Hakeem Olajuwon, David Robinson, Tim Duncan, and Shaquille O'Neal .
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Original:   Basketball players at the 1993 NCAA Men's Division I Final Four Category:
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Original: Basketball players from Texas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category:  People from Duncanville, Texas Category:  Sacramento Kings players Category:Sportspeople from Dallas Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category:American men's basketball playe
Revised: Basketball players from Texas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category: Organ transplant donors Category: People from Duncanville, Texas Category: Sacramento Kings players Category:Sportspeople from Dallas Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category:American men's basketball playe
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Original: Basketball players from Texas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category:  People from Duncanville, Texas Category:  Sacramento Kings players Category:Sportspeople from Dallas Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category:American men's basketball playe
Revised: Basketball players from Texas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category: People from Duncanville, Texas Category: People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category: Sacramento Kings players Category:Sportspeople from Dallas Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category:American men's basketball playe
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Original: Basketball players from Texas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category:  People from Duncanville, Texas Category:  Sacramento Kings players Category:Sportspeople from Dallas Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category:American men's basketball playe
Revised: Basketball players from Texas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category: People from Duncanville, Texas Category: Sacramento Kings players Category:Sportspeople from Dallas Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz playe
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Original:  He spent most of his career with the Utah Jazz of the National Basketball Association (NBA).
Revised:  Ostertag is considered to be the greatest player of all time. He is really the undisputed GOAT(Greatest of All Time). He spent most of his career with the Utah Jazz of the National Basketball Association (NBA).
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Original: Gregory Donovan Ostertag aka The GooseTag, aka The Real Break Concierge.
Revised: Gregory Donovan Ostertag 
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Original: In 2014, a prominent Los Angeles based street artist, Ostertag, began using Ostertag's name to promote his URL Ostertag is the co-founder of The Ostertag Group, an umbrella company that owns and operates ML Edwards & Co, Watermelon Mills Coffeehouse, and Ostertag Construction.
Revised:  Ostertag is the co-founder of The Ostertag Group, an umbrella company that owns and operates ML Edwards & Co, Watermelon Mills Coffeehouse, and Ostertag Construction.
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Original: Basketball players at the 1993 NCAA Division I Men's Final Four Category:Basketball players from Texas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:People from Duncanville, Texas Category:People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category:Sacramento Kings players Category:Sportspeople from Dallas Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz playe
Revised: Basketball players at the 1993 NCAA Division I Men's Final Four Category:Basketball players from Dallas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:People from Duncanville, Texas Category:People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category:Sacramento Kings players Category:Sportspeople from Dallas Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz playe
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Original: Basketball players at the 1993 NCAA Division I Men's Final Four Category:Basketball players from Texas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:People from Duncanville, Texas Category:People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category:Sacramento Kings players Category:Sportspeople from Dallas Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz playe
Revised: Basketball players at the 1993 NCAA Division I Men's Final Four Category:Basketball players from Texas Category:Centers (basketball) Category:Duncanville High School alumni Category:Kansas Jayhawks men's basketball players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:People from Duncanville, Texas Category:People from Mount Vernon, Texas Category:Sacramento Kings players Category:Texas Legends players Category:Utah Jazz draft picks Category:Utah Jazz playe
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Original: Wynand Claassen (born 16 January 1951, in Schweizer-Reneke) is a  South African rugby player .
Revised: Wynand Claassen (born 16 January 1951, in Schweizer-Reneke) is a former South African rugby player .
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Original:   He was selected as eighth-man for Northern Transvaal whilst studying architecture at the University of Pretoria in the late 1970s.
Revised:  Playing career He was selected as eighth-man for Northern Transvaal whilst studying architecture at the University of Pretoria in the late 1970s.
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Original:  His father was George Claassen, a schoolmaster from Middelburg Hoërskool and winner of the 1961 Comrades Marathon between Pietermaritzburg and Durban.
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Original:     Springbok captain In 1981 he earned international acclaim as captain during the infamous "Rebel Tour" in New Zealand.
Revised:  Test history Springbok captain In 1981 he earned international acclaim as captain during the infamous "Rebel Tour" in New Zealand.
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Original:  A self-portrait also accompanied the column   .
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Original:  Ireland 23–15 Number 8 (c) 30 May 1981 Newlands, Cape Town 2.
Revised:  23–15 Number 8 (c) 30 May 1981 Newlands, Cape Town 2.
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Original:  New Zealand 24–12 Number 8 (c) 29 August 1981 Athletic Park, Wellington 4.
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Original:  New Zealand 22–25 Number 8 (c) 12 September 1981 Eden Park, Auckland 5. USA 38–7 Number 8 (c) 20 September 1981 Owl Creek Polo ground, Glenville, New York 6.  South American Jaguars 50–18 Number 8 (c) 27 March 1982 Loftus Versfeld, Pretoria 7.  South American Jaguars 12–21 Number 8 (c) 3 April 1982 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein
Revised:  New Zealand 22–25 Number 8 (c) 12 September 1981 Eden Park, Auckland 5. 38–7 Number 8 (c) 20 September 1981 Owl Creek Polo ground, Glenville, New York 6. South American Jaguars 50–18 Number 8 (c) 27 March 1982 Loftus Versfeld, Pretoria 7. South American Jaguars 12–21 Number 8 (c) 3 April 1982 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein
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Original:  Ireland 12–10 Number 8 (c) 6 June 1981 Kings Park Stadium, Durban 3. 24–12 Number 8 (c) 29 August 1981 Athletic Park, Wellington 4.
Revised:  12–10 Number 8 (c) 6 June 1981 Kings Park Stadium, Durban 3. 24–12 Number 8 (c) 29 August 1981 Athletic Park, Wellington 4.
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Original:  New Zealand 22–25 Number 8 (c) 12 September 1981 Eden Park, Auckland 5. 38–7 Number 8 (c) 20 September 1981 Owl Creek Polo ground, Glenville, New York 6. 24px South American Jaguars 50–18 Number 8 (c) 27 March 1982 Loftus Versfeld, Pretoria 7. 24px South American Jaguars 12–21 Number 8 (c) 3 April 1982 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein
Revised:  22–25 Number 8 (c) 12 September 1981 Eden Park, Auckland 5. 38–7 Number 8 (c) 20 September 1981 Owl Creek Polo ground, Glenville, New York 6. 24px South American Jaguars 50–18 Number 8 (c) 27 March 1982 Loftus Versfeld, Pretoria 7. 24px South American Jaguars 12–21 Number 8 (c) 3 April 1982 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein
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