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Original:  He fashioned his party's program to appeal to the gentry, landowners, and merchants.
Revised:  He based his appeal on the upper class gentry, landowners, and merchants.
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Original:  He crafted a platform that appealed primarily to the gentry, Landowners and middle-class merchants who made up the bulk of the 10 percent of the population entitled to vote: around 40 million men .
Revised:  He crafted a platform that appealed primarily to the gentry, landowners and middle-class merchants who made up the bulk of the 10 percent of the population entitled to vote: around 40 million men .
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Original:  Song Jiaoren led the Kuomintang Party to electoral victories in China's first --and last--democratic elections .
Revised:  Song Jiaoren led the Kuomintang Party to electoral victories in China's first democratic election .
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Original: Biography Early life Song Jiaoren was born and educated in Hunan.
Revised:  Early life Song Jiaoren was born and educated in Hunan.
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Original:  Due to the influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, Song made no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was  interested mainly in  world events and the counterculture of his time . Song received excellent grades in college.
Revised:  The influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, Song made no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was interested mainly in world events and the counterculture of his time . Song received excellent grades in college.
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Original:  Due to the influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, Song made no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was  interested mainly in  world events and the counterculture of his time . Song received excellent grades in college.
Revised:  Due to the influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, caused Song to make no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was interested mainly in world events and the counterculture of his time . Song received excellent grades in college.
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Original:  Due to the influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, Song made no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was  interested mainly in  world events and the counterculture of his time . Song received excellent grades in college.
Revised:  Due to the influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, Song made no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was he interested mainly in world events and the counterculture of his time . Song received excellent grades in college.
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Original:  Due to the influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, Song made no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was  interested mainly in  world events and the counterculture of his time . Song received excellent grades in college.
Revised:  Due to the influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, Song made no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was interested mainly in his time's world events and the counterculture of his time . Song received excellent grades in college.
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Original:  Due to the influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, Song made no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was  interested mainly in  world events and the counterculture of his time . Song received excellent grades in college.
Revised:  Due to the influence of his teachers, Huang Shouyi and Qu Fangmei, Song made no effort to pursue the civil service examinations, and was interested mainly in world events and the counterculture . Song received excellent grades in college.
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Original:  Early Involvement in the Kuomintang Because of his revolutionary activities Song was forced to flee China for Japan in 1904 , where he studied western political thought and made contacts among the expatriate Chinese student population and Japanese Pan-Asianists.
Revised:  Early involvement in Kuomintang Because of his revolutionary activities Song was forced to flee China for Japan in 1904 , where he studied western political thought and made contacts among the expatriate Chinese student population and Japanese Pan-Asianists.
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Original:  Early Involvement in the Kuomintang Because of his revolutionary activities Song was forced to flee China for Japan in 1904 , where he studied western political thought and made contacts among the expatriate Chinese student population and Japanese Pan-Asianists.
Revised:  Early Involvement in the Kuomintang Because of his revolutionary activities , Song in 1904 was forced to flee China for Japan in 1904 , where he studied western political thought and made contacts among the expatriate Chinese student population and Japanese Pan-Asianists.
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Original:  Early Involvement in the Kuomintang Because of his revolutionary activities Song was forced to flee China for Japan in 1904 , where he studied western political thought and made contacts among the expatriate Chinese student population and Japanese Pan-Asianists.
Revised:  Early Involvement in the Kuomintang Because of his revolutionary activities Song was forced to flee China for Japan , where he studied western political thought and made contacts among the expatriate Chinese student population and Japanese Pan-Asianists.
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Original:  During this period, Song was a close friend of  Japanese nationalist thinker Kita Ikki.
Revised:  During this period, Song was a close friend of the Japanese nationalist thinker Kita Ikki.
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Original:  In 1905, together with Sun Yat-sen, Song helped found, and was a leading activist in , the Tongmenghui, which was an organization dedicated to the overthrow of the Qing Dynasty and the formation of a republic.
Revised:  In 1905, together with Sun Yat-sen, Song helped to found and was a leading activist in , the Tongmenghui, which was an organization dedicated to the overthrow of the Qing Dynasty and the formation of a republic.
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Original:  In 1905, together with Sun Yat-sen, Song helped found, and was a leading activist in , the Tongmenghui, which was an organization dedicated to the overthrow of the Qing Dynasty and the formation of a republic.
Revised:  In 1905, together with Sun Yat-sen, Song helped found, and was a leading activist in the Tongmenghui, which was an organization dedicated to the overthrow of the Qing Dynasty and the formation of a republic.
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Original:  In 1905, together with Sun Yat-sen, Song helped found, and was a leading activist in , the Tongmenghui, which was an organization dedicated to the overthrow of the Qing Dynasty and the formation of a republic.
Revised:  In 1905, together with Sun Yat-sen, Song helped found, and was a leading activist in , the Tongmenghui, which was an organization dedicated to the overthrow of the Qing dynasty and the formation of a republic.
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Original:  Song returned to China in 1910 after the Xinhai Revolution , traveling to Hong Kong the next year to organize the Second Guangzhou Uprising ;
Revised:  Song returned to China in 1910 after the Xinhai Revolution and traveled to Hong Kong the next year to organize the Second Guangzhou Uprising ;
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Original:  and, after the declaration of the Republic of China, in 1912, Song helped transform the Tongmenghui into the Kuomintang ( also known as the KMT or Chinese Nationalist Party ) . Song spoke out against the increasing authoritarianism of China's provisional president, Yuan Shikai, and expressed concerns towards Yuan's indications that he would like to restore a monarchical system to China with himself as emperor.
Revised:  and, after the declaration of the Republic of China, Song helped to transform the Tongmenghui into the Kuomintang ( also known as the KMT or Chinese Nationalist Party ) . Song spoke out against the increasing authoritarianism of China's provisional president, Yuan Shikai, and expressed concerns towards Yuan's indications that he would like to restore a monarchical system to China with himself as emperor.
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Original:  and, after the declaration of the Republic of China, in 1912, Song helped transform the Tongmenghui into the Kuomintang ( also known as the KMT or Chinese Nationalist Party ) . Song spoke out against the increasing authoritarianism of China's provisional president, Yuan Shikai, and expressed concerns towards Yuan's indications that he would like to restore a monarchical system to China with himself as emperor.
Revised:  and, after the declaration of the Republic of China, in 1912, Song helped transform the Tongmenghui into the Kuomintang , also known as the KMT or Chinese Nationalist Party ) . Song spoke out against the increasing authoritarianism of China's provisional president, Yuan Shikai, and expressed concerns towards Yuan's indications that he would like to restore a monarchical system to China with himself as emperor.
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Original:  and, after the declaration of the Republic of China, in 1912, Song helped transform the Tongmenghui into the Kuomintang ( also known as the KMT or Chinese Nationalist Party ) . Song spoke out against the increasing authoritarianism of China's provisional president, Yuan Shikai, and expressed concerns towards Yuan's indications that he would like to restore a monarchical system to China with himself as emperor.
Revised:  and, after the declaration of the Republic of China, in 1912, Song helped transform the Tongmenghui into the Kuomintang ( also known as the KMT or Chinese Nationalist Party . Song spoke out against the increasing authoritarianism of China's provisional president, Yuan Shikai, and expressed concerns towards Yuan's indications that he would like to restore a monarchical system to China with himself as emperor.
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Original:  Song was appointed to reform China's legal system, and he drafted a provisional constitution, the " Republic of China Interim Government Organization Act " . China's first election campaign Song Jiaoren was only thirty years old when he was tasked by Sun Yat-sen to organize the Kuomintang for China's first democratic election campaign, in 1912.
Revised:  Song was appointed to reform China's legal system, and he drafted a provisional constitution, the Republic of China Interim Government Organization Act " . China's first election campaign Song Jiaoren was only thirty years old when he was tasked by Sun Yat-sen to organize the Kuomintang for China's first democratic election campaign, in 1912.
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Original:  Song was appointed to reform China's legal system, and he drafted a provisional constitution, the " Republic of China Interim Government Organization Act " . China's first election campaign Song Jiaoren was only thirty years old when he was tasked by Sun Yat-sen to organize the Kuomintang for China's first democratic election campaign, in 1912.
Revised:  Song was appointed to reform China's legal system, and he drafted a provisional constitution, the " Republic of China Interim Government Organization Act . China's first election campaign Song Jiaoren was only thirty years old when he was tasked by Sun Yat-sen to organize the Kuomintang for China's first democratic election campaign, in 1912.
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Original:  Song was appointed to reform China's legal system, and he drafted a provisional constitution, the " Republic of China Interim Government Organization Act " . China's first election campaign Song Jiaoren was only thirty years old when he was tasked by Sun Yat-sen to organize the Kuomintang for China's first democratic election campaign, in 1912.
Revised:  Song was appointed to reform China's legal system, and he drafted a provisional constitution, the " Republic of China Interim Government Organization Act " . First Chinese election campaign Song Jiaoren was only thirty years old when he was tasked by Sun Yat-sen to organize the Kuomintang for China's first democratic election campaign, in 1912.
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Original:  Song was appointed to reform China's legal system, and he drafted a provisional constitution, the " Republic of China Interim Government Organization Act " . China's first election campaign Song Jiaoren was only thirty years old when he was tasked by Sun Yat-sen to organize the Kuomintang for China's first democratic election campaign, in 1912.
Revised:  Song was appointed to reform China's legal system, and he drafted a provisional constitution, the " Republic of China Interim Government Organization Act " . China's first election campaign Song Jiaoren was only 30 when he was tasked by Sun Yat-sen to organize the Kuomintang for China's first democratic election campaign, in 1912.
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Original:  In the 1912  election campaign,  Song proved to be a naturally skilled political organizer, but with an arrogant self-confidence that alienated many potential supporters.
Revised:  In the 1912 election campaign, Song proved to be a naturally-skilled political organizer, but with an arrogant self-confidence that alienated many potential supporters.
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Original:  In the 1912  election campaign,  Song proved to be a naturally skilled political organizer, but with an arrogant self-confidence that alienated many potential supporters.
Revised:  In the 1912 election campaign, Song proved to be a naturally skilled political organizer, but he had an arrogant self-confidence that alienated many potential supporters.
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Original:  In the 1912  election campaign,  Song proved to be a naturally skilled political organizer, but with an arrogant self-confidence that alienated many potential supporters.
Revised:  In the 1912 election campaign, Song proved to be a naturally skilled political organizer, but with an arrogant self-confidence , which alienated many potential supporters.
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Original:  They were the gentry, landowners and middle-class merchants And the form the political base of the new party.
Revised:  They were the gentry, landowners and middle-class merchants . They formed the political base of the new party.
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Original: Fenby (2013) p 5. Following the election, the Kuomintang won 269 of 596 seats in China's House of Representatives , and the party won 123 of 274 seats in the Senate.
Revised: Fenby (2013) p 5. After the election, the Kuomintang won 269 of 596 seats in China's House of Representatives , and the party won 123 of 274 seats in the Senate.
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Original: Fenby (2013) p 5. Following the election, the Kuomintang won 269 of 596 seats in China's House of Representatives , and the party won 123 of 274 seats in the Senate.
Revised: Fenby (2013) p 5. Following the election, the Kuomintang won 269 of 596 seats in the House of Representatives , and the party won 123 of 274 seats in the Senate.
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Original: Fenby (2013) p 5. Following the election, the Kuomintang won 269 of 596 seats in China's House of Representatives , and the party won 123 of 274 seats in the Senate.
Revised: Fenby (2013) p 5. Following the election, the Kuomintang won 269 of 596 seats in China's House of Representatives and 123 of 274 seats in the Senate.
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Original:  Of the remaining seats, the majority were split between three rival parties, though over three hundred small parties competed in the election.
Revised:  Of the remaining seats, the majority were split between three rival parties, but over 300 small parties competed in the election.
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Original:  One of Song's main political goals was to ensure that the powers and  independence of China's elected assemblies be properly protected from the influence of the office of the president.
Revised:  One of Song's main political goals was to ensure that the powers and the independence of China's elected assemblies be properly protected from the influence of the office of the president.
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Original:  One of Song's main political goals was to ensure that the powers and  independence of China's elected assemblies be properly protected from the influence of the office of the president.
Revised:  One of Song's main political goals was to ensure that the powers and independence of China's elected assemblies were properly protected from the influence of the office of the president.
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Original:  Song's goals in curtailing the office of the president conflicted with the interests of China's provisional president, Yuan Shikai , who, by mid-1912, clearly  dominated over the provisional cabinet that he had named and was showing signs of a desire to hold overweening executive power.
Revised:  Song's goals in curtailing the office of the president conflicted with the interests of China's provisional president, Yuan Shikai . By mid-1912, clearly dominated over the provisional cabinet that he had named and was showing signs of a desire to hold overweening executive power.
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Original:  When the results of the 1913 elections indicated a clear victory for the KMT, it appeared that Song would be in a position to exercise a dominant role in selecting the prime minister and cabinet, and the party could have proceeded to push for the election of a future president in a proper parliamentary setting.
Revised:  When the results of the 1913 elections indicated a clear victory for the Kuomintang, Song appeared to be in a position to exercise a dominant role in selecting the prime minister and cabinet, and the party could have proceeded to push for the election of a future president in a proper parliamentary setting.
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Original:  & . by a lone gunman named Wu Shiying who had been contracted by Ying Guixin, a Shanghai underworld figure closely associated with the Yuan Shikai regime ;
Revised:  & . by a lone gunman , Wu Shiying who had been contracted by Ying Guixin, a Shanghai underworld figure closely associated with the Yuan Shikai regime ;
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Original:  Although Yuan was considered by contemporary Chinese media sources the man most likely behind the assassination, the main conspirators investigated by authorities were either themselves assassinated or disappeared mysteriously.
Revised:  Although Yuan was considered by contemporary Chinese media sources the man most likely behind the assassination, the main conspirators investigated by authorities were themselves assassinated or disappeared mysteriously.
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Original:  Legacy The political climate within China degenerated soon after Song Jiaoren's assassination, eventually leading to the failed "Second Revolution" . Yuan Shikai ejected the Kuomintang from China's elected assemblies in 1913, dissolved parliament in 1914, declared himself emperor in 1915, and died in 1916.
Revised:  Legacy The political climate in China degenerated soon after Song Jiaoren's assassination, eventually leading to the failed "Second Revolution" . Yuan Shikai ejected the Kuomintang from China's elected assemblies in 1913, dissolved parliament in 1914, declared himself emperor in 1915, and died in 1916.
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Original:  Legacy The political climate within China degenerated soon after Song Jiaoren's assassination, eventually leading to the failed "Second Revolution" . Yuan Shikai ejected the Kuomintang from China's elected assemblies in 1913, dissolved parliament in 1914, declared himself emperor in 1915, and died in 1916.
Revised:  Legacy The political climate within China degenerated soon after Song Jiaoren's assassination, eventually leading to the failed Second Revolution . Yuan Shikai ejected the Kuomintang from China's elected assemblies in 1913, dissolved parliament in 1914, declared himself emperor in 1915, and died in 1916.
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Original:  Following the failure of China's first democratic system to achieve a stable government, the country descended into more than a decade of warlordism.
Revised:  After the failure of China's first democratic system to achieve a stable government, the country descended into more than a decade of warlordism.
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Original: Lifestyle gurus (also referred as lifestyle coaches, lifestyle trainers, lifestyle consultants) advise people on various aspects of his or her life, work, and relationships about how they can make themselves happier through changes in their lifestyle.
Revised: Lifestyle gurus (also called lifestyle coaches, lifestyle trainers, lifestyle consultants) advise people on various aspects of his or her life, work, and relationships about how they can make themselves happier through changes in their lifestyle.
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Original: Lifestyle gurus (also referred as lifestyle coaches, lifestyle trainers, lifestyle consultants) advise people on various aspects of his or her life, work, and relationships about how they can make themselves happier through changes in their lifestyle.
Revised: Lifestyle gurus (also referred as lifestyle coaches, lifestyle trainers, lifestyle consultants) advise people how they can make themselves happier through changes in their lifestyle.
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Original:  Lifestyle gurus profession was popularized by several celebrities, including Cherie Blair and Madonna in the 1990s and 2000s.
Revised:  Lifestyle gurus are a profession popularised by several celebrities, including Cherie Blair and Madonna in the 1990s and 2000s.
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Original:  Other criticisms focused on the perception that they are a symptom of the indecisiveness of today's society.
Revised:  Other criticisms have centred on the perception that they are a symptom of the indecisiveness of today's society.
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Original: Lifestyle gurus (also called lifestyle coaches, lifestyle trainers, lifestyle consultants) advise people how they can make themselves happier through changes in their lifestyle.
Revised:  gurus (also called lifestyle coaches, lifestyle trainers, lifestyle consultants) advise people how they can make themselves happier through changes in their lifestyle.
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Original:  Result: Adopted colspan="2" - colspan="2" style="text-align:left;" Security Council composition in 1971: - colspan = "2" permanent members: - colspan = "2" - colspan = "2" non-permanent members: - colspan = "2"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% - colspan = "2" United Nations Security Council Resolution 292, adopted unanimously on February 10, 1971, after examining the application of Bhutan for membership in the United Nations, the Council recommended to the General Assembly that Bhutan be admitted.
Revised:  Result: Adopted colspan="2" - colspan="2" style="text-align:left;" Security Council composition in 1971: - colspan = "2" permanent members: - colspan = "2" %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% - colspan = "2" United Nations Security Council Resolution 292, adopted unanimously on February 10, 1971, after examining the application of Bhutan for membership in the United Nations, the Council recommended to the General Assembly that Bhutan be admitted.
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Original:  Result: Adopted colspan="2" - colspan="2" style="text-align:left;" Security Council composition in 1971: - colspan = "2" permanent members: - colspan = "2" - colspan = "2" non-permanent members: - colspan = "2"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% - colspan = "2" United Nations Security Council Resolution 292, adopted unanimously on February 10, 1971, after examining the application of Bhutan for membership in the United Nations, the Council recommended to the General Assembly that Bhutan be admitted.
Revised:  Result: Adopted colspan="2" - colspan="2" style="text-align:left;" Security Council composition in 1971: - colspan = "2" permanent members: - colspan = "2" - colspan = "2" non-permanent members: - colspan = "2"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% United Nations Security Council Resolution 292, adopted unanimously on February 10, 1971, after examining the application of Bhutan for membership in the United Nations, the Council recommended to the General Assembly that Bhutan be admitted.
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