wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  I want you to know what's going on with her . I'm concerned about her emotional status.
Revised:  I want you to know what's going on with him . I'm concerned about her emotional status.
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Original:  I want you to know what's going on with her . I'm concerned about her emotional status.
Revised:  I want you to know what's going on with her . I'm concerned about his emotional status.
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Original:  I've also alerted Dr Anesthesiologist and Dr Surgeon about my concern, but they have agreed to go ahead with the surgery because she needs this procedure to salvage her foot."
Revised:  I've also alerted Dr Anesthesiologist and Dr Surgeon about my concern, but they have agreed to go ahead with the surgery because he needs this procedure to salvage her foot."
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Original:  Background: " She was in an auto accident last Friday, and her husband was killed.
Revised:  Background: " She was in an auto accident last Friday, and his wife was killed.
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Original:  Her children are all at the funeral home making arrangements for his burial.
Revised:  His children are all at the funeral home making arrangements for his burial.
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Original:  Her vital signs are stable;
Revised:  His vital signs are stable;
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Original:  We've just given her some Versed."
Revised:  We've just given him some Versed."
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Original:  Recommendation: "I suggest that you meet her as soon as possible and stay with her during induction and emergence from anesthesia."
Revised:  Recommendation: "I suggest that you meet her as soon as possible and stay with him during induction and emergence from anesthesia."
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Original:  a technique that can be used to 
Revised:  a technique that can be used to facilitate prompt and appropriate communication. This communication model has gained popularity in healthcare settings, especially amongst professions such as physicians and nursing. It is a way for health care professionals to communicate effectively with one another, and also allows for important information to be transferred accurately. The format of SBAR allows for short, organized and predictable flow of information between professionals.
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Original:  This communication model has gained popularity in healthcare settings, especially amongst professions such as physicians and nursing .
Revised:  This communication model has gained popularity in healthcare settings, especially amongst professions such as physicians and nurses .
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Original:  He has held the latter office from September 22, 1995 to May 10, 2012.
Revised:  He held the latter office from September 22, 1995 to May 10, 2012.
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Original: Nikolay Ivanovich Merkushkin (, ) (born February 5, 1951 in Novye Verkhissy, Mordovia) is the Governor of Samara Oblast and  former head of the Republic of Mordovia in Russia.
Revised: Nikolay Ivanovich Merkushkin (, ) (born February 5, 1951 in Novye Verkhissy, Mordovia) is a former Governor of Samara Oblast and former head of the Republic of Mordovia in Russia.
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Original: Nikolay Ivanovich Merkushkin (, ) (born February 5, 1951 in Novye Verkhissy, Mordovia) is the Governor of Samara Oblast and  former head of the Republic of Mordovia in Russia.
Revised: Nikolay Ivanovich Merkushkin (, ) (born February 5, 1951 in Novye Verkhissy, Mordovia) is the Governor of Samara Oblast and a former head of the Republic of Mordovia in Russia.
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Original:  On May 10 , 2012 Merkushkin resigned to become Acting Governor of Samara Oblast.
Revised:  On 10 , 2012 Merkushkin resigned to become Acting Governor of Samara Oblast.
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Original: Nikolay Ivanovich Merkushkin (, ) (born February 5, 1951 in Novye Verkhissy, Mordovia ) is a former Governor of Samara Oblast and a former head of the Republic of Mordovia in Russia.
Revised: Nikolay Ivanovich Merkushkin (, ) (born February 5, 1951 ) is a former Governor of Samara Oblast and a former head of the Republic of Mordovia in Russia.
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Original: Adrien Sibomana (born Bukeye, Muramvya September 4, 1953) was the prime minister of Burundi from October 19, 1988  until July 10, 1993.
Revised: Adrien Sibomana (born Bukeye, Muramvya September 4, 1953) was the prime minister of Burundi from October 19, 1988 , until July 10, 1993.
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Original: Adrien Sibomana (born Bukeye, Muramvya September 4 , 1953) was the prime minister of Burundi from October 19 , 1988 , until July 10 , 1993.
Revised: Adrien Sibomana (born Bukeye, Muramvya September 4 , 1953) was the prime minister of Burundi from 19 , 1988 , until July 10 , 1993.
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Original: Adrien Sibomana (born Bukeye, Muramvya September 4 , 1953) was the prime minister of Burundi from October 19 , 1988 , until July 10 , 1993.
Revised: Adrien Sibomana (born Bukeye, Muramvya September 4 , 1953) was the prime minister of Burundi from October 19 , 1988 until 10 , 1993.
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Original: Adrien Sibomana (born Bukeye, Muramvya on 4 September 1953  ) was the prime minister of Burundi from 19 October 1988 until 10 July 1993.
Revised: Adrien Sibomana (born 4 September 1953 ) was the prime minister of Burundi from 19 October 1988 until 10 July 1993.
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Original:   New subscriptions were also stopped.
Revised:  <ref> New subscriptions were also stopped.
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Original:  Current users were encouraged to use MobileMe services inside iCloud (account migration happening automatically anyway), but could continue to use their MobileMe services and access the me.com website until it was shut down on June 30, 2012 (although limited access beyond that date was available to download content).
Revised:  Current users were encouraged to use MobileMe services inside iCloud (account migration happening automatically anyway), but could continue to use their MobileMe servess the me.com website until it was shut down on June 30, 2012 (although limited access beyond that date was available to download content).
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Original: On February 24, 2011, (ten years ago) Apple discontinued offering MobileMe at its retail stores, and later from resellers.
Revised: On February 24, 2011, Apple discontinued offering MobileMe at its retail stores, and later from resellers.
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Original: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
Revised: Public: gallery.me.com/ – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
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Original: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
Revised: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
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Original: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
Revised: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
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Original: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
Revised: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
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Original: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
Revised: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
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Original: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / <calendar name> – user individual calendar publishing.
Revised: Public: gallery.me.com/ <username> – user's photo/video Gallery albums access (used with iPhoto and/or iMovie). public.me.com/ <username> – user's Public folder (in iDisk) access. web.me.com/ <username> – user's Website access (used with iWeb). homepage.mac.com/ <username> – user's file sites access. ical.me.com/ <username> / – user individual calendar publishing.
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Original:  See also Nobility Lord Lady Landed gentry Landed nobility%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Landowne
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Landowne
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Original:  She enrolled in the school of Otto Blensdorf (the Blensdorf-Schulen) in Wuppertal-Elberfeld when she was only 5 years old , and was graduated in the Hochschule für Musik in Berlin in 1929.
Revised:  She enrolled in the school of Otto Blensdorf (the Blensdorf-Schulen) in Wuppertal-Elberfeld , and was graduated in the Hochschule für Musik in Berlin in 1929.
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Original:  Gerda worked regularly in partnership with institutions like:  Private Theater School, the Royal Theatre  , the Theater Academy, Danish Broadcasting House (orchestra, choir and staff), Royal Music Conservatory,  Rigshospital, Dalcroze Societies, CEMEA - Centres d'Entrainement aux Méthodes d'Education Active, and many others.
Revised:  Gerda worked regularly in partnership with institutions like: Private Theater School, the Royal Theatre , the Theater Academy, Danish Broadcasting House (orchestra, choir and staff), Royal Music Conservatory, Rigshospital, Dalcroze Societies, CEMEA - Centres d'Entrainement aux Méthodes d'Education Active, and others.
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Original:  The Gerda Alexander School The school of Gerda Alexander 's school was located in a room in this building in the center of Copenhagen, at the square of Frederiks Kirke| 320x320pxGerda Alexander opened a school in Copenhagen in 1939 by the name of "Gerda Alexander Skolen".
Revised:  The Gerda Alexander School The school of Gerda Alexander was located in a room in this building in the center of Copenhagen, at the square of Frederiks Kirke| 320x320pxGerda Alexander opened a school in Copenhagen in 1939 by the name of "Gerda Alexander Skolen".
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Original:  The professional training in Eutony includes subjects as: Eutony (practice and theory, pedagogy and therapy), speech training, psychology, anatomy, physiology, neurology, neurophysiology, neuropathology, psychiatry and visiting seminars form specialists about current development in neurophysiology and other relevant disciplines   .
Revised:  The professional training in Eutony includes subjects as: Eutony (practice and theory, pedagogy and therapy), speech training, psychology, anatomy, physiology, neurology, neurophysiology, neuropathology, psychiatry and visiting seminars form specialists about current development in neurophysiology and other relevant disciplines . .
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Original: Gerda Alexander died  in Wuppertal, where she lived for the last few years , six days after her 86th birthday .
Revised: Gerda Alexander died in Wuppertal, where she lived for the last few years .
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Original:  These were the main influences of Gerda's work, according to Jean-Marie Huberty: The creation of Eutony Gerda Alexander found a way of regulating neuromuscular tone, what was confirmed later with the discovery of Gama System..
Revised:  These were the main historical influences on Gerda's work, according to Jean-Marie Huberty: The creation of Eutony Gerda Alexander found a way of regulating neuromuscular tone, what was confirmed later with the discovery of Gama System..
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Original:  These were the main influences of Gerda's work, according to Jean-Marie Huberty: The creation of Eutony Gerda Alexander found a way of regulating neuromuscular tone, what was confirmed later with the discovery of Gama System..
Revised:  These were the main influences of Gerda's work, according to Jean-Marie Huberty: The creation of Eutony Gerda Alexander found ways of regulating neuromuscular tone, what was confirmed later with the discovery of Gama System..
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Original:  In 1957, the school got state technical college recognition, in a three to four years of training with diploma.
Revised:  In 1957, the school got state technical college recognition, with a three to four years of training with diploma.
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Original:  In 1957, the school got state technical college recognition, in a three to four years of training with diploma.
Revised:  In 1957, the school got state technical college recognition, in a three to four years training with diploma.
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Original: Eduard Dallmann ( born 11 March 1830 in Blumenthal, close to Bremen;
Revised: Eduard Dallmann ( 11 March 1830 in Blumenthal, close to Bremen;
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Original:  died 23 December 1896 in the same place ) was a German whaler, trader  and Polar explorer.
Revised:  died 23 December 1896 ) was a German whaler, trader and Polar explorer.
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Original:  died 23 December 1896 in the same place ) was a German whaler, trader  and Polar explorer.
Revised:  died 23 December 1896 in the same place ) was a German whaler, trader , and Polar explorer.
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Original:  In 1866  he became captain of the Hawaiian ship W.C. Talbot , undertaking trading trips in the Bering and Chukchi seas to locations in Alaska and Chukotka.
Revised:  In 1866 , he became captain of the Hawaiian ship W.C. Talbot , undertaking trading trips in the Bering and Chukchi seas to locations in Alaska and Chukotka.
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Original:  In 1866  he became captain of the Hawaiian ship W.C. Talbot , undertaking trading trips in the Bering and Chukchi seas to locations in Alaska and Chukotka.
Revised:  In 1866 he became captain of the Hawaii-registered ship W.C. Talbot , undertaking trading trips in the Bering and Chukchi seas to locations in Alaska and Chukotka.
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Original:  In 1866  he became captain of the Hawaiian ship W.C. Talbot , undertaking trading trips in the Bering and Chukchi seas to locations in Alaska and Chukotka.
Revised:  In 1866 he became captain of the Hawaiian ship W.C. Talbot and undertook trading trips through the Bering and Chukchi seas to locations in Alaska and Chukotka.
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Original:  In 1866  he became captain of the Hawaiian ship W.C. Talbot , undertaking trading trips in the Bering and Chukchi seas to locations in Alaska and Chukotka.
Revised:  In 1866 he became captain of the Hawaiian ship W.C. Talbot , undertaking trading trips in the Bering and Chukchi Seas to locations in Alaska and Chukotka.
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Original:  He was the first recorded European to set foot on Wrangel Island.
Revised:  He was the first European to set foot on Wrangel Island.
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Original:  From 1867 to 1870  he commanded the whaleship Count Bismarck on a whaling cruise to the Pacific tropics, the Sea of Okhotsk, and the Bering and Chukchi seas.
Revised:  From 1867 to 1870 , he commanded the whaleship Count Bismarck on a whaling cruise to the Pacific tropics, the Sea of Okhotsk, and the Bering and Chukchi seas.
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Original:  From 1867 to 1870  he commanded the whaleship Count Bismarck on a whaling cruise to the Pacific tropics, the Sea of Okhotsk, and the Bering and Chukchi seas.
Revised:  From 1867 to 1870 he commanded the Count Bismarck on a whaling cruise to the Pacific tropics, the Sea of Okhotsk, and the Bering and Chukchi seas.
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Original:  In 1872 /74, when the whales began to become rare in the Arctic waters, Dallmann was commissioned to explore the Antarctic seas on the sailing steamer Grönland.
Revised:  From 1872 /74, when the whales began to become rare in the Arctic waters, Dallmann was commissioned to explore the Antarctic seas on the sailing steamer Grönland.
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Original:  In 1872 /74, when the whales began to become rare in the Arctic waters, Dallmann was commissioned to explore the Antarctic seas on the sailing steamer Grönland.
Revised:  In 1872 to 1874, when whales became more of a rarity in Arctic waters, Dallmann was commissioned to explore the Antarctic seas on the sailing steamer Grönland.
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Original:  In 1872 /74, when the whales began to become rare in the Arctic waters, Dallmann was commissioned to explore the Antarctic seas on the sailing steamer Grönland.
Revised:  In 1872 /74, when the whales began to become rare in the Arctic waters, Dallmann was commissioned to explore the Antarctic seas on the sailing-steamer Grönland.
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Original:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege  and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
Revised:  The operation was moderately successful from a whaling point-of-view, but more importantly , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
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Original:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege  and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
Revised:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
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Original:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege  and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
Revised:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
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Original:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege  and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
Revised:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica —among others the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
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Original:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege  and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
Revised:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait . Of great value as well was his charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
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Original:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege  and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
Revised:  The operation was moderately successful from the point of view of whaling , however, Dallmann made many important discoveries around Antarctica during this expedition, foremost of which were the Bismarck Strait and the charting of Anvers, Brabant, Liege , and Kaiser-Wilhelm Islands.
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Original:  Between 1877 and 1884, on behalf of Russian financier Baron von Knoop, Dallmann made annual attempts to haul freight to the Gulf of Ob and the Yenisei Gulf  to be exchanged for grain and other cargoes brought down those great Siberian rivers by means of barges.
Revised:  Between 1877 and 1884, on behalf of Russian financier Baron von Knoop, Dallmann made annual attempts to haul freight to the Gulf of Ob and the Yenisei Gulf , to be exchanged for grain and other cargoes brought down those great Siberian rivers by means of barges.
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Original:  Between 1877 and 1884, on behalf of Russian financier Baron von Knoop, Dallmann made annual attempts to haul freight to the Gulf of Ob and the Yenisei Gulf  to be exchanged for grain and other cargoes brought down those great Siberian rivers by means of barges.
Revised:  Between 1877 and 1884, on behalf of Russian financier Baron von Knoop, Dallmann made annual attempts to haul freight to the Gulf of Ob and the Yenisei Gulf to be exchanged for grain and other cargoes brought down the great Siberian rivers by means of barges.
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