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Original:  so you'll then see consequences being loss of IQ, learning difficulties, hearing difficulties and other neurological problems . "  If you then go to early life, if an infant's not getting enough iodine , then again, brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goitre and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life."
Revised:  so you'll then see consequences being loss of IQ, learning difficulties, hearing difficulties and other neurological problems . " If an infant's not getting enough iodine , then again, brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goitre and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life."
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Original:  so you'll then see consequences being loss of IQ, learning difficulties, hearing difficulties and other neurological problems . "  If you then go to early life, if an infant's not getting enough iodine , then again, brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goitre and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life."
Revised:  so you'll then see consequences being loss of IQ, learning difficulties, hearing difficulties and other neurological problems . " If you then go to early life, if an infant's not getting enough iodine ... brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goitre and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life."
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Original:  The World Health Organisation  recommends that every country should iodise all edible salt.
Revised:  The World Health Organisation (WHO) recommends that every country should iodise all edible salt.
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Original:  But at the other end of the scale we've got to make sure the people who eat a lot of food - we all know the teenage boy who comes home from school and eats a whole loaf of bread - that those people don't get too much and get overdose . " Ms Bauchtman said.
Revised:  But at the other end of the scale we've got to make sure the people who eat a lot of food - we all know the teenage boy who comes home from school and eats a whole loaf of bread - that those people don't get too much and get overdose , " Ms Bauchtman said.
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Original:  Ionine deficiency can lead to serious health problems including brain damage, stunted growth and deafness.
Revised:  Iodine deficiency can lead to serious health problems including brain damage, stunted growth and deafness.
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Original: "If an infant's not getting enough iodine... brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goitre and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life." 200px More than two billion people around the world live in areas prone to iodine deficiency, and yet the problem is easily fixed.
Revised: "If an infant's not getting enough iodine... brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goiter and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life." 200px More than two billion people around the world live in areas prone to iodine deficiency, and yet the problem is easily fixed.
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Original:  The most well known effects of IDD are visible goitre and cretinism, a condition characterised by severe brain damage occurring in very early life.
Revised:  The most well known effects of IDD are visible goiter and cretinism, a condition characterised by severe brain damage occurring in very early life.
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Original:  A 47th minute goal from Thierry Henry meant that Arsenal became the first side from England ever to win at the Santiago Bernabéu Stadium .
Revised:  A 47th minute goal from meant that Arsenal became the first side from England ever to win at the Santiago Bernabéu Stadium .
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Original:  A 47th minute goal from Thierry Henry meant that Arsenal became the first side from England ever to win at the Santiago Bernabéu Stadium .
Revised:  A 47th minute goal from Thierry Henry meant that Arsenal became the first side from England ever to win at the .
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Original:  Arsenal's Spanish forward Jose Antonio Reyes had had an early chance, which was saved by Casillas while Roberto Carlos blocked a Fredrik Ljungberg shot.
Revised:  Arsenal's Spanish forward had had an early chance, which was saved by Casillas while Roberto Carlos blocked a Fredrik Ljungberg shot.
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Original:  Arsenal's Spanish forward Jose Antonio Reyes had had an early chance, which was saved by Casillas while Roberto Carlos blocked a Fredrik Ljungberg shot.
Revised:  Arsenal's Spanish forward Jose Antonio Reyes had had an early chance, which was saved by Casillas while blocked a shot.
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Original:  At the other end, Real's David Beckham had two chances, one a missed header and the other a clear one-on-one, but Jens Lehmann saved.
Revised:  At the other end, Real's David Beckham had two chances, one a missed header and the other a clear one-on-one, but saved.
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Original:  The second leg of the tie will be played at Highbury on March 8, 2006.
Revised:  The second leg of the tie will be played at on March 8, 2006.
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Original:  Earlier USGU reports had estimated the magnitude at 6.9.
Revised:  Earlier USGS reports had estimated the magnitude at 6.9.
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Original:  The quake occurred approximately 100km  from the Zimbabwe border.
Revised:  The quake occurred approximately 100km away from the Zimbabwe border.
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Original:  Police said an arrest warrant has been issued for Keenan on the charge of failing to update his information with Maryland's State Sex Offender Registry.
Revised:  Police said an arrest warrant had been issued for Keenan on the charge of failing to update his information with Maryland's State Sex Offender Registry.
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Original:  Keenan's last verified address listed with the registry was in the 3700-block of North Point Road in Dundalk, Maryland  
Revised:  Keenan's last verified address listed with the registry was in the 3700-block of North Point Road in Dundalk, Maryland . 
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Original: Police in Baltimore County, Maryland asked for the public's assistance to find 23 year old Matthew P. Keenan.
Revised: Police in Baltimore County, Maryland asked for the public's help to find 23 year old Matthew P. Keenan.
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Original:  Information on convicted offenders , including addresses, have been made public.
Revised:  Addresses of offenders have been made public.
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Original:  Colonel Gordon Messenger, commander of the British forces in Southern Afghanistan, has said that troops under his command will not be engaged in the fight against opium cultivation.
Revised: raw opium Colonel Gordon Messenger, commander of the British forces in Southern Afghanistan, has said that troops under his command will not be engaged in the fight against opium cultivation.
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Original: Kim Beazley, labor backbencher and former party leader, may have to face challengers in his bid to fill the vacumn left by the resignation of previous labor leader Mark Latham.
Revised: Kim Beazley, labor backbencher and former party leader, may have to face challengers in his bid to fill the vacuum left by the resignation of previous labor leader Mark Latham.
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Original:  Beazley is the only person to have declared his candidatcy so far, while both Gillard and Rudd have both refused to commit to running or not running.
Revised:  Beazley is the only person to have declared his candidacy so far, while both Gillard and Rudd have both refused to commit to running or not running.
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Original:  After returning from his tour of tsunami devestaed South East Asia Rudd said that "Once I've had a shave, what I'd like to do is hit the phones and talk to colleagues". references Beazley gets a run for his money Swan calls for majority Labor vote
Revised:  After returning from his tour of tsunami devastated South East Asia Rudd said that "Once I've had a shave, what I'd like to do is hit the phones and talk to colleagues". references Beazley gets a run for his money Swan calls for majority Labor vote
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Original:  After returning from his tour of tsunami devestaed South East Asia Rudd said that "Once I've had a shave, what I'd like to do is hit the phones and talk to colleagues". references Beazley gets a run for his money Swan calls for majority Labor vote
Revised:  After returning from his tour of tsunami devestaed South East Asia Rudd said that "Once I've had a shave, what I'd like to do is hit the phones and talk to colleagues". References Beazley gets a run for his money Swan calls for majority Labor vote
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Original: Frontbencher Laurie Ferguson who is backing Ms Gillard told ABC radio that "From what I gather around around the place, I think there's a number of people urging her to run.
Revised: Frontbencher Laurie Ferguson who is backing Ms Gillard told ABC radio that "From what I gather around the place, I think there's a number of people urging her to run.
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Original: Kim Beazley, labor backbencher and former party leader, may have to face challengers in his bid to fill the vacuum left by the resignation of previous labor leader Mark Latham.
Revised: Kim Beazley, Labor backbencher and former party leader, may have to face challengers in his bid to fill the vacuum left by the resignation of previous labor leader Mark Latham.
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Original:  Category: January 21, 2005 Category: United States Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Politics and conflicts Category: LGBT Category:Publishe
Revised:  Category: United States Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Politics and conflicts Category: LGBT Category:Publishe
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Original:  Category: January 21, 2005 Category: United States Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Politics and conflicts Category: LGBT Category:Publishe
Revised:  Category: January 21, 2005 Category: United States Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Politics and conflicts Category: LG
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Original:  They also advised users to change their password on other websites if it is similar to the one used on Zappos  
Revised:  They also advised users to change their password on other websites if it is similar to the one used on Zappos . 
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Original: Zappos's corporate headquarters in , one of the largest online retailers of shoes and apparel, disclosed Sunday that it was hit by a cyber attack.
Revised:  , one of the largest online retailers of shoes and apparel, disclosed Sunday that it was hit by a cyber attack.
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Original: , one of the largest online retailers of shoes and apparel, disclosed Sunday that it was hit by a cyber attack .
Revised: , one of the largest online retailers of shoes and apparel, disclosed Sunday that it was hit by a .
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Original:  This is common practice among e-commerce websites.
Revised:  This is common practice among websites.
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Original: Zappos.com required it's users change their account passwords.
Revised: Zappos.com required its users change their account passwords.
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Original:  The baby was born at 9:49 am (1449 UTC)between the and stations .
Revised:  She gave birth between the and stations at 9:49 am (1449 UTC)between the and stations .
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Original:  She and her husband Aditya Saurabh were heading to  for a "practice run".
Revised:  She and her husband Aditya Saurabh were heading to in for a "practice run".
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Original:  Saurbh along with her child were then taken to St.
Revised:  Sarker along with her child were then taken to St.
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Original:  A fellow rider who happened to be a physician at St.
Revised:  A St.
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Original: Sarker experienced labor pains quickly after she boarded the Manhattan bound PATH train at Journal Square  .
Revised: Sarker boarded the Manhattan-bound PATH train at Journal Square .
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Original:  At first she believed that these were false and premature , but soon realized that she was in fact giving birth.
Revised:  At first she believed these were , but soon realized that she was in fact giving birth.
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Original:  At first she believed that these were false and premature , but soon realized that she was in fact giving birth.
Revised:  At first she believed that these were false and premature , but soon realized she was in fact giving birth.
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Original: The dispatched three officers and two paramedics to the platform of the 33rd Street station.
Revised: Paramedics and three officers were waiting on the platform of the 33rd Street station.
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Original:  Once train conductors heard that she was in labor, they switched the train to express service and bypassed stops to go directly to 33rd Street from Journal Square . Paramedics and three officers were waiting on the platform of the 33rd Street station.
Revised:  Once train conductors heard that she was in labor, they switched the train to express service and bypassed stops to go directly to 33rd Street . Paramedics and three officers were waiting on the platform of the 33rd Street station.
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Original:  “ As the train came into the station, the woman had already given birth ,” Sgt.
Revised:  “ As the train came into the station, the woman had already given birth ", Sgt.
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Original:  Mike Barry , Port Authority Police, said.
Revised:  Mike Barry of the Port Authority police said.
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Original:  A telethon was organised a week ago , and, on the same Sunday as the Sarmalele Reci concert, Romanian artists will auction off their works to raise money for the disaster victims.
Revised:  A telethon was organised last Sunday , and, on the same Sunday as the Sarmalele Reci concert, Romanian artists will auction off their works to raise money for the disaster victims.
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Original:  The concert is part of a campaign by Televiziunea Română, the Romanian national broadcaster, to raise This show is part of a campaign by TVR to raise funds for those affected by the tsunami . -   
Revised:  The concert is part of a campaign by Televiziunea Română, the Romanian national broadcaster, to raise References 
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Original:  References Related articles Romanian artists auction off their works for tsunami victims Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims  Category:Bucharest Category:Romania Category:Culture and entertainment Category: Earthquakes Category:Publishe
Revised:  Related articles Romanian artists auction off their works for tsunami victims Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims Category:Bucharest Category:Romania Category:Culture and entertainment Category: Earthquakes Category:Publishe
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Original:  References Related articles Romanian artists auction off their works for tsunami victims Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims  Category:Bucharest Category:Romania Category:Culture and entertainment Category: Earthquakes Category:Publishe
Revised:  References Related News Romanian artists auction off their works for tsunami victims Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims Category:Bucharest Category:Romania Category:Culture and entertainment Category: Earthquakes Category:Publishe
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Original:  References Related articles Romanian artists auction off their works for tsunami victims Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims  Category:Bucharest Category:Romania Category:Culture and entertainment Category: Earthquakes Category:Publishe
Revised:  References Related articles Romanian artists auction off their works for tsunami victims Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims Category:Bucharest Category:Romania Category:Culture and entertainment Category: Earthquak
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Original:  Rushdie was expected to address at least to literary sessions on January 20.
Revised:  Rushdie was expected to address at least two literary sessions on January 20.
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Original: ," said Mufti Abul Qasim Nomani, the vice chancellor. questioned,
Revised: ," said Mufti Abul Qasim Nomani, the vice chancellor. 
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Original: at the 2011 party. author may not attend the this year following widespread protests from the .
Revised:  author may not attend the this year following widespread protests from the .
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Original:  " Salman Rushdie's presence does have security implications and we are keeping a close watch and have been in touch with the organisers, " Gehlot told NDTV today.
Revised:  " Salman Rushdie's presence does have security implications and we are keeping a close watch and have been in touch with the organisers, " 
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Original:  "His books have hurt and insulted Muslims and Islam -- how can he be a guest of this country?
Revised:  "His books have hurt and insulted Muslims and Islam — how can he be a guest of this country?
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Original:  Craigslist put up a splash page opposing SOPA and PIPA. from the , which supports SOPA/PIPA, released a statement accusing "some technology business interests" of attempting to pull "stunts that punish their users or turn them into their corporate pawns, rather than coming to the table to find solutions to a problem that all now seem to agree is very real and damaging".
Revised:  from the , which supports SOPA/PIPA, released a statement accusing "some technology business interests" of attempting to pull "stunts that punish their users or turn them into their corporate pawns, rather than coming to the table to find solutions to a problem that all now seem to agree is very real and damaging".
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Original:  Dodd went on to claim that the blackout actions are "irresponsible", "dangerous" and "a disservice to people who rely on them for information and use their services" , which of course it would be if nobody knew how to block Javascript
Revised:  Dodd went on to claim that the blackout actions are "irresponsible", "dangerous" and "a disservice to people who rely on them for information and use their services" 
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Original: Within hours of the blasts , CBC reports, as many as 168 Sunni mosques had been attack or set afire.
Revised: Within hours of the blasts Sunni mosques had been attack or set afire.
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Original: Within hours of the blasts , CBC reports, as many as 168 Sunni mosques had been attack or set afire.
Revised: Within hours of the blasts , CBC reports, as many as 168 Sunni mosques had been attacked or set afire.
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Original:  Atwar Bahjat, correspondent for the al-Arabiya network, and two local journalists were kidnapped and killed leaving Samarra   .
Revised:  Atwar Bahjat, correspondent for the al-Arabiya network, and two local journalists were kidnapped and killed leaving Samarra . .
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Original:  31 \% stated that they would vote for the Social Democratic Party, while the right-wing Greater Romania Party would receive 14\% of the vote.
Revised:  25 \% stated that they would vote for the Social Democratic Party, while the right-wing Greater Romania Party would receive 14\% of the vote.
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Original: The second more popular major politician is the opposition leader and head of the Social Democratic Party, Mircea Geoană, who has an approval rating of 47\%.
Revised: The second-most popular major politician is the opposition leader and head of the Social Democratic Party, Mircea Geoană, who has an approval rating of 47\%.
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Original: Arroyo has forbidden protest rallies, but more than a thousand Filipinos attended rallies anyway  Bloomberg.com says "thousands of Filipinos"), and cops broke up a couple of rallies on Edsa, the main street of Manila, as they were heading downtown (to Makati), with shields and nightsticks.
Revised: Arroyo has forbidden protest rallies, but more than a thousand Filipinos attended rallies anyway ( Bloomberg.com says "thousands of Filipinos"), and cops broke up a couple of rallies on Edsa, the main street of Manila, as they were heading downtown (to Makati), with shields and nightsticks.
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Original:  Arroyo won the 2004 election, but some people accused her pf doing so by cheating.
Revised:  Arroyo won the 2004 election, but some people accused her of doing so by cheating.
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Original: Arroyo has forbidden protest rallies, but more than a thousand Filipinos attended rallies anyway (Bloomberg.com says "thousands of Filipinos"), and cops broke up a couple of rallies on Edsa, the main street of Manila, as they were heading downtown (to Makati), with shields and nightsticks.
Revised: Arroyo has forbidden protest rallies, but more than a thousand Filipinos attended rallies anyway (Bloomberg.com says "thousands of Filipinos"), and police broke up a couple of rallies on Edsa, the main street of Manila, as they were heading downtown (to Makati), with shields and nightsticks.
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Original:  It is expected that a memorial to the students will be built, either at the site of the accident or at the local High School. Link tit
Revised:  It is expected that a memorial to the students will be built, either at the site of the accident or at the local High Schoo
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Original:  It is expected that a memorial to the students will be built, either at the site of the accident or at the local High Schoo 
Revised:  It is expected that a memorial to the students will be built, either at the site of the accident or at the local High School. 
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Original:  It is expected that a memorial to the students will be built, either at the site of the accident or at the local High School . category:Australia category:Oceania category:Crime and law category:Disasters and acciden
Revised:  It is expected that a memorial to the students will be built, either at the site of the accident or at the local High School category:Australia category:Oceania category:Crime and law category:Disasters and acciden
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Original:  It is expected that a memorial to the students will be built, either at the site of the accident or at the local High School . category:Australia category:Oceania category:Crime and law category:Disasters and acciden
Revised:  It is expected that a memorial to the students will be built, either at the site of the accident or at the local High School . 
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Original: 6 teenagers , aged between 15-17, were killed in a horrific road accident near Mildura , northwestern Victoria, late at night on the 18th of February .
Revised: Six teenagers were killed in a horrific road accident near Mildura , northwestern Victoria, late at night on the 18th of February .
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Original:  The victims were Cassandra Manners,  Stevie-Lee Weight,  Cory Dowling, and Shane and Abby Hirst.
Revised:  Cassandra Manners, Stevie-Lee Weight, Cory Dowling, and Shane and Abby Hirst.
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Original:  All were killed instatly, while Josephine Calvi was flown to  Adelaide Hospital, where she  died of head injuries.
Revised:  All were killed instatly, while Josephine Calvi was flown to Adelaide Hospital, where she later died of head injuries.
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