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Original: Responding to public criticism, President Bush stated that " I'm going to find out over time what went right and what went wrong."
Revised: Responding to public criticism, President Bush stated he intends " I'm going to find out over time what went right and what went wrong."
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Original: Responding to public criticism, President Bush stated that " I'm going to find out over time what went right and what went wrong."
Revised: Responding to public criticism, President Bush stated that " to lead an investigation to find out what went right and what went wrong."
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Original:  The drop comes largely in response to the Bush Administration's -- and in particular  FEMA's -- inability to handle the recent rescue and recovery efforts after Hurricane Katrina hit New Orleans, Louisiana.
Revised:  The drop comes largely in response to the Bush Administration's -- and in particular , FEMA's -- inability to handle the recent rescue and recovery efforts after Hurricane Katrina hit New Orleans, Louisiana.
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Original: The operation in the Anbar province is focused on cutting off Islamic State ’s supply routes to prepare the way for the recapture of Ramadi.
Revised: The operation in the Anbar province sought to cut off Islamic State ’s supply routes to prepare the way for the recapture of Ramadi.
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Original: The operation in the Anbar province is focused on cutting off Islamic State ’s supply routes to prepare the way for the recapture of Ramadi.
Revised: The operation in the Anbar province is focused on cutting off Islamic State supply routes to prepare the way for the recapture of Ramadi.
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Original: A meeting of the nations fighting Islamic State will take place in on June 2.
Revised: A meeting is scheduled for June 2 in between representatives of countries fighting Islamic State will take place in on June 2.
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Original:  The meeting will be attended by 20 foreign ministers, including U.S. secretary of State , and will focus on military strategy against Islamic State
Revised:  The meeting will be attended by 20 foreign ministers, including U.S. secretary of State , and will focus on military strategy 
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Original: The operation in the Anbar province sought to cut off Islamic State supply routes to prepare the way for the recapture of Ramadi.
Revised: The operation in the Anbar province seeks to cut off Islamic State supply routes to prepare the way for the recapture of Ramadi.
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Original:  There has so far been fighting  to the south and west of Ramadi as pro-government forces make their advance.
Revised:  There has so far been fighting reported to the south and west of Ramadi as pro-government forces make their advance.
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Original:  the meeting is to focus on military strategy
Revised:  the meeting is to focus on strategy
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Original:  It was organised by the Triskel Arts Centre and the Evening Echo(a local paper) , and was part of the city's tenure as European Capital of Culture.
Revised:  It was organised by the Triskel Arts Centre and the local newspaper Evening Echo , and was part of the city's tenure as European Capital of Culture.
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Original: Tempers flare during long queues outside a Birmingham petrol station, 12 September 2005.
Revised: Long queues outside a Birmingham petrol station, 12 September 2005.
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Original:  Long queues are forming outside UK petrol stations as motorists rush to buy fuel ahead of protest planned for later this week . Consumer groups such as 'The Fuel Lobby', the group behind the fuel protests in 2000, will stage more protests from Wednesday to Friday this week.
Revised:  Long queues are forming outside UK petrol stations as motorists rush to buy fuel ahead of protests starting today . Consumer groups such as 'The Fuel Lobby', the group behind the fuel protests in 2000, will stage more protests from Wednesday to Friday this week.
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Original:  Eyewitnesses say that as well as filling up their own tanks, people are taking spare tanks.
Revised:  An eyewitness has said that as well as filling up their own tanks, people are taking spare tanks.
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Original:  Bill Johnson, a petrol station manager in Cornwall, told the Guardian that he had to restrict petrol supplies to account holders only and said: "They were shouting, 'You fucking bastards, I've got to get to work.'
Revised:  Bill Johnson, a petrol station manager in Cornwall, told the Guardian that he found it necessary to restrict petrol supplies to account holders only and said: "They were shouting, 'You fucking bastards, I've got to get to work.'
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Original:  Bill Johnson, a petrol station manager in Cornwall, told the Guardian that he had to restrict petrol supplies to account holders only and said: "They were shouting, 'You fucking bastards, I've got to get to work.'
Revised:  Bill Johnson, a petrol station manager in Cornwall, told the Guardian that he had to restrict petrol supplies to account holders only . He said: "They were shouting, 'You fucking bastards, I've got to get to work.'
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Original: The government have urged buyers to 'fight until death' in order to obtain the fuel.
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Original:  The San Francisco Giants defeated the Texas Rangers 3–1 on Monday night, winning the fifth game of the 2010 World Series and clinching the series title  
Revised:  The San Francisco Giants defeated the Texas Rangers 3–1 on Monday night, winning the fifth game of the 2010 World Series and clinching the series title . It was the first World Series win for the Giants since 1954. 
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Original:  During the World Series, Rentería had a batting average of .412, a total of six runs batted in, and two home runs.
Revised:  During the World Series, the Colombia native had a batting average of .412, a total of six runs batted in, and two home runs.
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Original:  He also became the fourth player to hit the game-winning run in a World Series twice in a career.
Revised:  Rentería also became the fourth player to hit the game-winning run in a World Series twice in a career.
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Original: On Monday, Israeli troops burned Jewish synagogues as they left Gaza.
Revised: On Monday, Israeli troops left Gaza.
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Original:  Palestinians were angry at the cabinet's Sunday vote , and so the Israeli army burned a few as it was leaving .
Revised:  Palestinians were angry at the cabinet's Sunday vote .
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Original: On Monday, Israeli troops left Gaza.
Revised: On Monday, the Israeli army withdrew from Gaza.
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Original:  The 38 years of Israeli occupation of the Gaza strip have officially ended.
Revised:  The 38 years of Israeli presence in the Gaza strip have officially ended.
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Original:  Palestinian police admitted that there was not much they could  do to stop this.
Revised:  Palestinian police admitted that there was not much they could or would do to stop this.
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Original:  Last year, the Israeli cabinet had said it would destroy the synagogues, but this Sunday, under pressure from religious Jewish organizations,  reversed its decision.
Revised:  Last year, the Israeli cabinet had planned to destroy the synagogues, but this Sunday, under pressure from religious Jewish organizations, reversed its decision.
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Original:  Last year, the Israeli cabinet had said it would destroy the synagogues, but this Sunday, under pressure from religious Jewish organizations,  reversed its decision.
Revised:  Last year, the Israeli cabinet had said it would destroy the synagogues, but this Sunday, under pressure from religious Jewish organizations, it reversed its decision.
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Original: The Walt Disney Company and the government ofHong Kong officially opened the world's eleventh Disney theme park, Hong Kong Disneyland, today at 13:00PM local time.
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Original:  The park, located in Penny's Bay, Lantau Island, is the major attraction at the Hong Kong Disneyland Resort, which also features two luxurious hotels and a recreational lake with stunning views of local Hong Kong scenery, unlike previous Disney theme parks.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Chinese Vice President Zeng Qinghong, chief executive of Hong Kong Special Administrative Region, Donald Tsang Yam-kuen, and vice chairman of the Chinese People's Political Consultative Conference National Committee, Tung Chee-hwa, were present at the ceremony, as were joint Walt Disney CEOs Michael Eisner and Bob Iger, among a host of Disney Imagineers who helped design and create the park.
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Original:  The park has been criticised for it's apparant lack of attractions compared to the other Disney theme parks around the world, but senior show designer for the park, Tom Morris, told journalists that the Imagineers had left much room around the park for expansion, and if all goes well financially, much construction will be going on in the next few years.
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Original:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner  Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in  the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
Revised:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
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Original:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner  Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in  the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
Revised:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign . More than approximately $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
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Original:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner  Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in  the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
Revised:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of that was diverted to knocking out California Insurance Commissioner Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
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Original:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner  Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in  the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
Revised:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner and also Republican candidate Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
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Original:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner  Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in  the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
Revised:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
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Original:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner  Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in  the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, and more than \%62 of all voters mentioned it as one of the main reasons for voting.
Revised:  Previously Whitman spent near $ 141 million total to support her campaign , $80 million of which was concentrated on defeating California Insurance Commissioner Steve Poizner, also a Republican, in the primary election . Reportedly, the votes cast on the election was mostly based on concerns for the bad economy, 
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Original:  “I see California once again leading in renewable energy, in public education and openness to every kind of person, whatever their color is,” he said.
Revised:  “I see California once again leading in renewable energy, in public education and openness to every kind of person, whatever their color is,” Brown said.
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Original:  Some mudslinging, including a spurious accusation by one of Brown ’s supporters that Whitman was a “whore”, also ensued a few days before the night of the election took place in the Fox theater, according to Cnet.
Revised:  Some mudslinging, including an incident when an unidentified Brown supporter was found to have called Whitman a “whore”, also ensued a few days before the night of the election took place in the Fox theater, according to Cnet.
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Original:  Growing concerns with who should be elected to lead the future of California’s big budget crisis lead to the high number of votes cast for this particular kind of election.
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Original:  Some mudslinging, including an incident when an unidentified Brown supporter was found to have called Whitman a “whore” , also ensued a few days before the night of the election took place in the Fox theater, according to Cnet.
Revised:  Some mudslinging, including an incident when an unidentified Brown supporter was found to have called Whitman a "whore" , also ensued a few days before the night of the election took place in the Fox theater, according to Cnet.
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Original:  “ I see California once again leading in renewable energy, in public education and openness to every kind of person, whatever their color is, ” Brown said.
Revised:  " I see California once again leading in renewable energy, in public education and openness to every kind of person, whatever their color is, ” Brown said.
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Original:  “ I see California once again leading in renewable energy, in public education and openness to every kind of person, whatever their color is, ” Brown said.
Revised:  “ I see California once again leading in renewable energy, in public education and openness to every kind of person, whatever their color is, " Brown said.
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Original:  “ I mean, we’re all God ’ s children.
Revised:  " I mean, we’re all God ’ s children.
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Original:  “ I mean, we’re all God ’ s children.
Revised:  “ I mean, we’re all God ' s children.
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Original:  Some mudslinging, including an incident when an unidentified Brown supporter was found to have called Whitman a "whore", also ensued a few days before the night of the election took place in the Fox theater , according to Cnet.
Revised:  Some mudslinging, including an incident when an unidentified Brown supporter was found to have called Whitman a "whore", also ensued a few days before the night of the election , according to Cnet.
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Original:  The company hopes to diversify ist profit sources and gain popularity in areas where Skype holds strong position, such as China, Eastern Europe and Brazil.
Revised:  The company hopes to diversify its profit sources and gain popularity in areas where Skype holds strong position, such as China, Eastern Europe and Brazil.
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Original: right right  EBay, the  largest online marketplace  agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion in cash, stock and rewards, but it may pay further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met ( in 2007 and 2008).
Revised: right right EBay, the world's largest online marketplace agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion in cash, stock and rewards, but it may pay further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met ( in 2007 and 2008).
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Original: right right  EBay, the  largest online marketplace  agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion in cash, stock and rewards, but it may pay further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met ( in 2007 and 2008).
Revised: right right EBay, the largest online marketplace , agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion in cash, stock and rewards, but it may pay further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met ( in 2007 and 2008).
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Original: right right  EBay, the  largest online marketplace  agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion in cash, stock and rewards, but it may pay further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met ( in 2007 and 2008).
Revised: right right EBay, the largest online marketplace agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion USD in cash, stock and rewards, and may pay a further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met ( in 2007 and 2008).
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Original: right right  EBay, the  largest online marketplace  agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion in cash, stock and rewards, but it may pay further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met ( in 2007 and 2008).
Revised: right right EBay, the largest online marketplace agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion in cash, stock and rewards, but it may pay further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met in 2007 and 2008).
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Original: right right  EBay, the  largest online marketplace  agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion in cash, stock and rewards, but it may pay further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met ( in 2007 and 2008).
Revised: right right EBay, the largest online marketplace agreed to buy Skype, company providing the most popular internet telephony service, for $2.6 billion in cash, stock and rewards, but it may pay further $ 1.5 billion if the company's financial targets are met ( in 2007 and 2008.
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Original:  Skype technology is to be introduced on eBay's website, allowing sellers to receive calls or leads from the site users for a fee.
Revised:  Skype technology is to be introduced on eBay's website, allowing sellers to receive calls or leads from the sites users, for a fee.
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Original:  The company hopes to diversify its profit sources and gain popularity in areas where Skype holds  strong position, such as China, Eastern Europe and Brazil.
Revised:  The company hopes to diversify its profit sources and gain popularity in areas where Skype holds a strong position, such as China, Eastern Europe and Brazil.
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Original: Researchers at Kanazawa University Japan have identified a hormone produced and secreted by the liver as a previously unknown cause of insulin resistance.
Revised: Researchers at Japan's Kanazawa University announced the identification of a hormone produced and secreted by the liver as a previously unknown cause of insulin resistance.
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Original: Researchers at Kanazawa University Japan have identified a hormone produced and secreted by the liver as a previously unknown cause of insulin resistance.
Revised: Researchers at Kanazawa University Japan have identified a hormone produced by the liver as a previously unknown cause of insulin resistance.
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Original: Researchers at Kanazawa University Japan have identified a hormone produced and secreted by the liver as a previously unknown cause of insulin resistance.
Revised: Researchers at Kanazawa University Japan have identified a hormone produced and secreted by the liver , apparently a previously unknown cause of insulin resistance.
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Original:  This discovery may be a new target for the treatment of insulin resistance and type 2 diabetes.
Revised:  The discovery may offer new research targets in treating insulin resistance and type 2 diabetes.
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Original:  Insulin resistance (IR) is a physiological condition where the body's cells are unable to respond to insulin properly .
Revised:  Insulin resistance (IR) is a condition where the body's cells are unable to respond to insulin properly .
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Original:  Insulin resistance (IR) is a physiological condition where the body's cells are unable to respond to insulin properly .
Revised:  Insulin resistance (IR) is a physiological condition where the body's cells are unable to respond properly to insulin-based treatments .
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Original:  The pancreas keeps producing more insulin but can't keep up to increases in glucose level as the body isn't able to utilize the produced insulin properly.
Revised:  The pancreas continues insulin production fails to prevent increases in glucose level as the body isn't able to utilize the produced insulin properly.
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Original:  The pancreas keeps producing more insulin but can't keep up to increases in glucose level as the body isn't able to utilize the produced insulin properly.
Revised:  The pancreas keeps producing more insulin but can't keep up to increases in glucose levels; the body unable to use the insulin properly.
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Original:  They found that the liver expresses higher levels of the gene encoding "selenoprotein P" (SEPP1) in people with type 2 diabetes who are more insulin resistant.
Revised:  The researchers found the liver expresses higher levels of the gene encoding "selenoprotein P" (SEPP1) in people with type 2 diabetes who are more insulin resistant.
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