wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: William Oliver Reese (born 1987) was a US Navy airman who, on January 3, 2006 murdered 56-year-old Japanese woman Yoshie Sato in Yokosuka, Japan.
Revised: William Oliver Reese (born 1987) is a US Navy airman who, on January 3, 2006 murdered 56-year-old Japanese woman Yoshie Sato in Yokosuka, Japan.
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Original: Philomycidae A slug family Shape of love dartSpeciesReferences The dart is thick and curved.
Revised: Philomycidae Shape of love dartSpeciesReferences The dart is thick and curved.
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Original:  This is because mucus on the dart introduces a hormone-like substance that allows far more of its sperm to survive .
Revised:  This is because mucus on the dart contains an allomone (pheromone-like) compound that promotes sperm preservation mechanisms in the female .
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Original:  this action is more analogous to a stabbing, or to being shot with an arrow or flechette.
Revised:  this action is more analogous to stabbing, or to being shot with an arrow or flechette.
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Original:  For the male component of the pair of snails, the function of the love dart is to manipulate the female component’s sperm collection , thus increasing  paternity for the male component.
Revised:  For the male component of the pair of snails, the function of the love dart is to manipulate the female component’s sperm collection , thus increasing the chances of paternity for the male component.
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Original:  For the male component of the pair of snails, the function of the love dart is to manipulate the female component’s sperm collection , thus increasing  paternity for the male component.
Revised:  For the male component of the pair of snails, the function of the love dart is to manipulate the female component’s sperm collection , thus increasing paternity for the sender.
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Original:  A close look into the behavior of Cornu aspersum shows that it is not the mechanical action of the dart that increases paternity in the sperm donor, but instead it is triggered by the nature of the mucus that coats the dart .
Revised:  A close look into the behavior of Cornu aspersum shows that this is achieved not by the mechanical action of the dart that increases paternity in the sperm donor, but instead it is triggered by the nature of the mucus that coats the dart .
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Original:  A close look into the behavior of Cornu aspersum shows that it is not the mechanical action of the dart that increases paternity in the sperm donor, but instead it is triggered by the nature of the mucus that coats the dart .
Revised:  A close look into the behavior of Cornu aspersum shows that it is not the mechanical action of the dart as it penetrates the recepient's skin, but by the mucus that coats the dart .
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Original:  A close look into the behavior of Cornu aspersum shows that it is not the mechanical action of the dart that increases paternity in the sperm donor, but instead it is triggered by the nature of the mucus that coats the dart .
Revised:  A close look into the behavior of Cornu aspersum shows that it is not the mechanical action of the dart that increases paternity in the sperm donor, but instead it is triggered by the nature of the mucus that coats the dart :
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Original:  The mucus carries an allohormone that is transferred into the recipient snail ’s hemolymph when the dart is stabbed.
Revised:  The mucus carries an allohormone that is transferred into the recipient ’s hemolymph when the dart is stabbed.
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Original: The Cupid connection [[File:Bertel Thorvaldsen - Cupid.jpg|130px|Cupid statue by Bertel Thorvaldsen]] Some writers have commented on the parallel between the love darts of snails and the love darts fired by the Roman god Cupid, known as Erosin Greek mythology.
Revised: The Cupid connection [[File:Bertel Thorvaldsen - Cupid.jpg|130px|Cupid statue by Bertel Thorvaldsen]] Some writers have commented on the parallel between the love darts of snails and the love darts fired by the Greek god Eros, called Cupid in Roman mythology.
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Original:  For example, in the German language it is called a Liebespfeil or "love arrow", and in the Czech language it is šíp lásky (which means "arrow of love").
Revised:  For example, in German it is called a Liebespfeil or "love arrow", and in the Czech language it is šíp lásky (which means "arrow of love").
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Original:  For example, in the German language it is called a Liebespfeil or "love arrow", and in the Czech language it is šíp lásky (which means "arrow of love").
Revised:  For example, in the German language it is called a Liebespfeil or "love arrow", and in Czech it is šíp lásky (which means "arrow of love").
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Original:  Technically, the 'Colony of Kenya' referred to the interior lands, while a coastal strip (nominally on lease from the sultan of Zanzibar) was the 'Protectorate of Kenya'  but the two were controlled as a single administrative unit.
Revised:  Technically, the 'Colony of Kenya' referred to the interior lands, while a coastal strip (nominally on lease from the Sultan of Zanzibar) was the 'Protectorate of Kenya' but the two were controlled as a single administrative unit.
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Original:  Technically, the 'Colony of Kenya' referred to the interior lands, while a coastal strip (nominally on lease from the sultan of Zanzibar) was the 'Protectorate of Kenya'  but the two were controlled as a single administrative unit.
Revised:  Technically, the 'Colony of Kenya' referred to the interior lands, while a coastal strip (nominally on lease from the sultan of Zanzibar) was the 'Protectorate of Kenya' , but the two were controlled as a single administrative unit.
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Original: The Colony and Protectorate of Kenya, commonly known as British Kenya, was part of the British Empire in Africa from 1st June 1895 until 1st June 1963.
Revised: The Colony and Protectorate of Kenya, commonly known as British Kenya, was part of the British Empire in Africa .
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Original: Kenya Protectorate Order in Council, 1920, S.R.O. 1920 No. 2343 & S.I. Rev. VIII, 258, State Pp., Vol. 87, p. 968."Commonwealth and Colonial Law" by Kenneth Roberts-Wray, London, Stevens, 1966. p. 762Brennan, James R. “ Lowering the Sultan’s Flag: Sovereignty and Decolonization in Coastal Kenya.”
Revised: Kenya Protectorate Order in Council, 1920, S.R.O. 1920 No. 2343 & S.I. Rev. VIII, 258, State Pp., Vol. 87, p. 968."Commonwealth and Colonial Law" by Kenneth Roberts-Wray, London, Stevens, 1966. p. 762Brennan, James R. " Lowering the Sultan’s Flag: Sovereignty and Decolonization in Coastal Kenya.”
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Original:  Retrieved 2015-07-24 On 26 May 1963, Kenya had its first elections and a new red, green, black and white flag was introduced.
Revised:  Retrieved 24 July 2015 On 26 May 1963, Kenya had its first elections and a new red, green, black and white flag was introduced.
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Original:  Annual Report Kenya, 1956 (London: H.M.S.O.), 135-140. URL
Revised:  Annual Report Kenya, 1956 (London: H.M.S.O.), 135–140. URL
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Original:  Many of the poets were also involved in the major developments in the theater during this time, and the other way around, with people important in the theater becoming famous through the development of the sanqu type of qu.
Revised:  Many of the poets were also involved in the major developments in the theater during this time, and the other way around, with people important in the theater becoming famus through the development of the sanqu type of qu.
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Original:  The other cultures and peoples in the Mongol World Empire also very much influenced China.
Revised:  The other cultures and peoples in the Mongol Empire also very much influenced China.
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Original: Although Genghis Khan (an uprising ex-subject of the Jin Empire) had been enthroned with the Chinese title of Emperor in 1206 and the Mongol Empire had ruled territories including modern-day northern China for decades, it was not until 1271 that Kublai Khan officially proclaimed the dynasty in the traditional Chinese style, and the conquest was not complete until 1279 when the Southern Song dynasty was defeated in the Battle of Yamen.
Revised: Although Genghis Khan had been enthroned with the Chinese title of Emperor in 1206 and the Mongol Empire had ruled territories including modern-day northern China for decades, it was not until 1271 that Kublai Khan officially proclaimed the dynasty in the traditional Chinese style, and the conquest was not complete until 1279 when the Southern Song dynasty was defeated in the Battle of Yamen.
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Original:  Although the Yuan did not openly announce it, its choice of white as its imperial color suggests that it considered Jin, another conquest dynasty, rather than the Han-Chinese Song dynasty, as its rightful predecessor.
Revised:  Although the Yuan did not openly announce it, its choice of wite as its imperial color suggests that it considered Jin, another conquest dynasty, rather than the Han-Chinese Song dynasty, as its rightful predecessor.
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Original:  Although the Yuan did not openly announce it, its choice of wite as its imperial color suggests that it considered Jin, another conquest dynasty, rather than the Han-Chinese Song dynasty, as its rightful predecessor.
Revised:  Although the Yuan did not openly announce it, its choice of white as its imperial color suggests that it considered Jin, another conquest dynasty, rather than the Han-Chinese Song dynasty, as its rightful predecessor.
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Original:  Métis nations of mixed ancestry originated in the mid-17th century when First Nations and Inuit people married European fur traders, primarily the French.
Revised:  Métis of mixed ancestry originated in the mid-17th century when First Nations and Inuit people married European fur traders, primarily the French.
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Original: Indigenous peoples in Canada /> are the indigenous peoples within the boundaries of Canada.
Revised: Indigenous peoples in Canada are the indigenous peoples within the boundaries of Canada.
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Original:  Vinod Scarianotebook, needs login OpenWetWare (hosts many laboratories and allows for selective sharing of information related to each research group) Caleb Morse Gus Rosanianotebook Antony Garrett Lisi Rosie Redfield, microbiologist at the University of British Columbia;
Revised:  Vinod Scaria OpenWetWare (hosts many laboratories and allows for selective sharing of information related to each research group) Caleb Morse Gus Rosanianotebook Antony Garrett Lisi Rosie Redfield, microbiologist at the University of British Columbia;
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Original:  Selective Content, Immediate Sharing Greg Lang, post doc in David Botstein's lab at Princeton University.
Revised:  Greg Lang, post doc in David Botstein's lab at Princeton University.
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Original:  All Content, Delayed Sharing - shared on approximately a weekly basis
Revised:  - shared on approximately a weekly basis
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Original: thumb Open-notebook science is the practice of making the entire primary record of a research project publicly available online as it is recorded.
Revised:  Open-notebook science is the practice of making the entire primary record of a research project publicly available online as it is recorded.
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Original: Partial / Pseudo open notebooks These are initiatives more open than traditional laboratory notebooks but lacking a key component for full Open Notebook Science.
Revised: Partially open / Pseudo open notebooks These are initiatives more open than traditional laboratory notebooks but lacking a key component for full Open Notebook Science.
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Original: Partial / Pseudo open notebooks These are initiatives more open than traditional laboratory notebooks but lacking a key component for full Open Notebook Science.
Revised: Partial / pseudo-open notebooks These are initiatives more open than traditional laboratory notebooks but lacking a key component for full Open Notebook Science.
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Original: Drawbacks The arguments against adopting Open Notebook Science fall mainly into three categories which have differing importance in different fields of science.
Revised: Drawbacks The arguments against adopting open notebook science fall mainly into three categories which have differing importance in different fields of science.
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Original:  The second argument advanced against Open Notebook Science is that it constitutes prior publication, thus making it impossible to patent and difficult to publish the results in the traditional peer reviewed literature.
Revised:  The second argument advanced against open notebook science is that it constitutes prior publication, thus making it impossible to patent and difficult to publish the results in the traditional peer reviewed literature.
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Original:  Therefore, while there may be arguments over the value of patents, and approaches that get around this problem, it is clear that Open Notebook Science is not appropriate for research for which patent protection is an expected and desired outcome.
Revised:  Therefore, while there may be arguments over the value of patents, and approaches that get around this problem, it is clear that open notebook science is not appropriate for research for which patent protection is an expected and desired outcome.
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Original:  Those publishers that accept material that has been previously published in these forms have generally indicated informally that web publication of data, including Open Notebook Science , falls into this category.
Revised:  Those publishers that accept material that has been previously published in these forms have generally indicated informally that web publication of data, including open notebook science , falls into this category.
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Original:  If the current volume of the peer reviewed literature is too large for any one person to manage, then how can anyone be expected to cope with the huge quantity of non peer reviewed material that could potentially be available, especially when some, perhaps most, would be of poor quality?
Revised:  If the current volume of the peer reviewed literature is too large for any one person to manage, then how can anyone be expected to cope with the huge quantity of non –peer-reviewed material that could potentially be available, especially when some, perhaps most, would be of poor quality?
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Original:  The issue of curation and validating data and methodological quality is a serious issue and one that arguably has relevance beyond Open Notebook Science but is a particular challenge here.
Revised:  The issue of curation and validating data and methodological quality is a serious issue and one that arguably has relevance beyond open notebook science but is a particular challenge here.
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Original:  Fully open notebooks are marked as " All Content " and " Immediate " access.
Revised:  Fully open notebooks are marked as " all content " and " Immediate " access.
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Original:  Fully open notebooks are marked as " All Content " and " Immediate " access.
Revised:  Fully open notebooks are marked as " All Content " and " immediate " access.
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Original:  Partially open notebooks can be marked as either " Selected Content " and/or " Delayed ".
Revised:  Partially open notebooks can be marked as either " selected content " and/or " Delayed ".
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Original:  Partially open notebooks can be marked as either " Selected Content " and/or " Delayed ".
Revised:  Partially open notebooks can be marked as either " Selected Content " and/or " delayed ".
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Original:  While the degree to which research groups steal or adapt the results of others remains a subject of debate it is certainly the case that the fear of not being first to publish drives much behaviour , particularly in some fields.
Revised:  While the degree to which research groups steal or adapt the results of others remains a subject of debate it is certainly the case that the fear of not being first to publish drives much behavior , particularly in some fields.
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Original:  It is to be expected that those publishers that explicitly exclude these forms of pre-publication will not accept material previously disclosed in an open notebook   .
Revised:  It is to be expected that those publishers that explicitly exclude these forms of pre-publication will not accept material previously disclosed in an open notebook . .
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Original:  It is to be expected that those publishers that explicitly exclude these forms of pre-publication will not accept material previously disclosed in an open notebook   .
Revised:  It is to be expected that those publishers that explicitly exclude these forms of pre-publication will not accept material previously disclosed in an open notebook A third argument advanced against open notebook science is that it vitiates independence of competing research and hence may result in lack of all important independent verification of results. This is not the same as data-scooping, but the much more subtle possibility of allowing data that is co-evolving to influence each other. In traditional science large experimental collaborations often establish fire-wall rules preventing communication between members of competing collaborations to prevent not just data leakage but also influencing the methodology by w which data is analyzed .
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Original:  The camp commandant Siaka Touré managed to hide, but General Lansana Diané, minister of Defense , was captured.
Revised:  The camp commandant Siaka Touré managed to hide, but General Lansana Diané, minister of Defence , was captured.
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Original:  During the regime of corrupt President Ahmed Sékou Touré, thousands of political opponents were imprisoned at the camp.
Revised:  During the regime of President Ahmed Sékou Touré, thousands of political opponents were imprisoned at the camp.
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Original:  Fodéba Keïta, former Minister of Defense, was  arrested for alleged complicity in the Labé plot.
Revised:  Fodéba Keïta, former Minister of Defense, was also arrested for alleged complicity in the Labé plot.
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Original:  In February 1977 five prominent prisoners were eliminated through the black diet: Diallo Telli, ex-ministers Barry Alpha Oumar and Dramé Alioune  , and army officers Diallo Alhassana and Kouyate Laminé.
Revised:  In February 1977 five prominent prisoners were eliminated through the black diet: Diallo Telli, ex-ministers Barry Alpha Oumar , Dramé Alioune , and army officers Diallo Alhassana and Kouyate Laminé.
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Original: FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category: Expatriate football managers in Russia Category: Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen peop
Revised: FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category: Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen peop
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Original: Azerbaijan international footballers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen peop
Revised: Azerbaijan international footballers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen people Category:UAE Division 1 playe
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Original: FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen people Category:UAE Division 1 playe
Revised: FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen people Category:UAE Division 1 players Category:Russian football manage
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Original: FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen people Category:UAE Division 1 players Category:Russian football  manage
Revised: FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen people Category:UAE Division 1 players Category:Russian football managers Category:Azerbaijani football manage
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Original: FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen people Category:UAE Division 1 players Category:Russian football manage 
Revised: FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:PFC CSKA Moscow players Category:Dubai Club players Category:FC Sokol Saratov players Category:Expatriate footballers in Kazakhstan Category:Azerbaijani football managers Category:FC Akhmat Grozny managers Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Azerbaijani expatriate footballers Category:Russian expatriates in Kazakhstan Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen people Category:UAE Division 1 players Category:Russian football managers 
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Original:  In R. Petty and J. Kosnikedidedo (Eds.), Attitude Strength. (pp. 413–432).
Revised:  In R. Petty and J. Kosnik (Eds.), Attitude Strength. (pp. 413–432).
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