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Original:  Beginning from the 2011 school year, the French ministry of education emitted an official circular letter of instructions, in which a first step towards the EPCC is initiated by advising the teachers to give a list of specific learning material to be reworked before a test.
Revised:  Beginning from the 2011 school year, the French ministry of education produced an official circular letter of instructions, in which a first step towards the EPCC is initiated by advising the teachers to give a list of specific learning material to be reworked before a test.
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Original:  Beginning from the 2011 school year, the French ministry of education emitted an official circular letter of instructions, in which a first step towards the EPCC is initiated by advising the teachers to give a list of specific learning material to be reworked before a test.
Revised:  Beginning from the 2011 school year, the French ministry of education emitted an official circular letter of instructions, in which a first step towards the EPCC is initiated by advising that teachers should give a list of specific learning material to be reworked before a test.
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Original: The phenomenon of the macabre constant is the prevalent fact (particularly in the French educational system) that there is a constant percentage of poor grades  in the educational system, no matter the actual academic level of students in relation to the knowledge actually required.
Revised: The macabre constant is the prevalent fact (particularly in the French educational system) that there is a constant percentage of poor grades in the educational system, no matter the actual academic level of students in relation to the knowledge actually required.
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Original: The phenomenon of the macabre constant is the prevalent fact (particularly in the French educational system) that there is a constant percentage of poor grades  in the educational system, no matter the actual academic level of students in relation to the knowledge actually required.
Revised: The phenomenon of the macabre constant is the prevalent fact (particularly in the French educational system) that there is a constant percentage of poor grades in the educational system, no matter the actual academic level of the students and their proficiency at the knowledge and skills actually required.
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Original:  This phenomenon can form a large part of the cause of the depression and exclusion of many students and is one of the main causes of educational failure.
Revised:  This phenomenon can form a large part of the cause of the distress and scholar disengagement for many students facing those issues, and thus it could be one of the main causes of educational failure.
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Original:  The macabre constant creates an "artificial failure of students",Educpros interview of André Antibi on 09.06.09 (fr) which may potentially lead to a school disengagement of failing students by a mechanism similar to the learned helplessness.
Revised:  Thus, the macabre constant would create an "artificial failure of students",Educpros interview of André Antibi on 09.06.09 (fr) which may potentially lead to a school disengagement of failing students by a mechanism similar to the learned helplessness.
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Original:  It should be noted that this concept does not apply only to elite courses (even if it is more prevalent in these courses), but also to general education and at all levels of education.
Revised:  This concept does not apply only to elite courses (even if it is more prevalent in these courses), but also to general education and at all levels of education.
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Original: EducPros journal article of 2011-10-18 (fr)L'Étudiant journal article about educational assessment biases on 2011-10-18 (fr) "L’obsession évaluative, une maladie française ?", LeMonde article on 2011-10-20 (fr)
Revised: EducPros journal article of 2011-10-18 (fr)L'Étudiant journal article about educational assessment biases on 2011-10-18 (fr) 
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Original:  Pulpwood Pulpwood refers to the use of wood for making paper.
Revised:  Pulpwood Pulpwood is wood that is raised specifically for use in making paper.
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Original:  NBA courts have been traditionally made out of parquetry.
Revised:  National Basketball Association courts have been traditionally made out of parquetry.
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Original: Naren Ray (1940Sandesh (Bengali children's magazine), author Debasish Sen Sarodiya(September–October)2003 issue - 24 July 2003) better known as Sufi, was a Bengali cartoonist with a career spanning nearly five decades, during which time he published political as well as children's cartoons in prominent Bengali magazines and newspapers.
Revised: Naren Ray (1940Sandesh (Bengali children's magazine), author Debasish Sen Sarodiya(September–October)2003 issue – 24 July 2003) better known as Sufi, was a Bengali cartoonist with a career spanning nearly five decades, during which time he published political as well as children's cartoons in prominent Bengali magazines and newspapers.
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Original:  Sufi started drawing cartoons for Sandesh during 1962-63.
Revised:  Sufi started drawing cartoons for Sandesh during 1962–63.
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Original:  In 1967-68 Dinesh Chandra Chattopadhyay started publishing Kishore Bharati.
Revised:  In 1967–68 Dinesh Chandra Chattopadhyay started publishing Kishore Bharati.
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Original:  He was plagued by asthma and was hospitalized repeatedly for breathing troubles.
Revised:  He was plagued by asthma and was hospitalised repeatedly for breathing troubles.
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Original:  Posthumously he has been favorably reviewed by his surviving peers as well as the media and is widely considered a formidable figure of cartoon and caricature in Bengali.
Revised:  Posthumously he has been favourably reviewed by his surviving peers as well as the media and is widely considered a formidable figure of cartoon and caricature in Bengali.
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Original:  The idea of never being able to go back to his childhood abode deeply distressed him.
Revised:  Being unable to return to his childhood abode deeply distressed him.
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Original:  Then a child, Sufi was taken out of school in Brahmanberia , where he was in class four.
Revised:  Then a child, Sufi was taken out of school in Brahmanbaria , where he was in class four.
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Original:  While he offered private tuition to sponsor his reading habits and was also member of local libraries, he mostly borrowed books from acquaintances, finishing  three a day.
Revised:  While he offered private tuition to sponsor his reading habits and was also member of local libraries, he mostly borrowed books from acquaintances, finishing up to three a day.
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Original:  One of his famous comic series was Raja (the detective kid)  Bagha (his dog) that was published in Kishore Bharati magazine.
Revised:  One of his comic series was Raja (the detective kid) Bagha (his dog) that was published in Kishore Bharati magazine.
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Original:  One of his famous comic series was Raja (the detective kid)  Bagha (his dog) that was published in Kishore Bharati magazine.
Revised:  One of his famous comic series was Raja (the detective kid) and Bagha (his dog) that was published in Kishore Bharati magazine.
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Original:  He ruled  1863 - 1864.
Revised:  He ruled from 1863 - 1864.
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Original:  He ruled  1863 - 1864.
Revised:  He ruled 1863 to 1864.
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Original:  He was the last king of  Makololo dynasty.
Revised:  He was the last king of the Makololo dynasty.
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Original: Uses In their book Education in Human Creative Existential Planning, Anna-Teresa Tymieniecka uses the term Genetic Anthropotechnic as a means of ensuring that only the desired characters are inherited by future generations of human beings though the usage of genetics and hence, avoidance of the "fatalism" of inheritance.
Revised: Uses In her book Education in Human Creative Existential Planning, Anna-Teresa Tymieniecka uses the term Genetic Anthropotechnic as a means of ensuring that only the desired characters are inherited by future generations of human beings though the usage of genetics and hence, avoidance of the "fatalism" of inheritance.
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Original:  In her book Phenomenology of Life from the Animal Soul to the Human Mind: In search of experience , Anna-Teresa Tymieniecka uses the term Anthropotechnic with reference to the ability of human being to turn animals from being dangerous to "human-friendly".
Revised:  In her book Phenomenology of Life from the Animal Soul to the Human Mind: In search of experience , Tymieniecka uses the term Anthropotechnic with reference to the ability of human being to turn animals from being dangerous to "human-friendly".
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Original:  In their  paper Anthropotechnics in vehicle control ( Dynamic systems control and guidance by man in light of anthropotechnics, treating approaches to man machine systems optimization, Bernotat uses the term to describe methods of adapting machine to men.
Revised:  In their paper Anthropotechnics in vehicle control - Dynamic systems control and guidance by man in light of anthropotechnics, treating approaches to man machine systems optimization, Bernotat uses the term to describe methods of adapting machine to men.
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Original:  In her book Bronze and iron: old Latin poetry from its beginnings to 100 B.C. . Janet Lembke uses the Anthropotechnic to describe the "monstrous" connection between machine and man, as compared to social and intimate connections.
Revised:  In her book Bronze and iron: old Latin poetry from its beginnings to 100 B.C. , Janet Lembke uses the Anthropotechnic to describe the "monstrous" connection between machine and man, as compared to social and intimate connections.
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Original:  In his book Christa Sommerer and Laurent Mignonneau: interactive art research . Gerfried Stocker uses the term with reference to Web 2.0 and Search engines and describes it as "a tecnique for the humanization of humans".
Revised:  In his book Christa Sommerer and Laurent Mignonneau: interactive art research , Gerfried Stocker uses the term with reference to Web 2.0 and Search engines and describes it as "a tecnique for the humanization of humans".
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Original:  Also  in her Phenomenology of Life from the Animal Soul to the Human Mind: In search of experience , Tymieniecka uses the term Anthropotechnic with reference to the ability of human being to turn animals from being dangerous to "human-friendly".
Revised:  Also , in her Phenomenology of Life from the Animal Soul to the Human Mind: In search of experience , Tymieniecka uses the term Anthropotechnic with reference to the ability of human being to turn animals from being dangerous to "human-friendly".
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Original:  Also  in her Phenomenology of Life from the Animal Soul to the Human Mind: In search of experience , Tymieniecka uses the term Anthropotechnic with reference to the ability of human being to turn animals from being dangerous to "human-friendly".
Revised:  Also in her Phenomenology of Life from the Animal Soul to the Human Mind: In search of experience , she uses the term Anthropotechnic with reference to the ability of human being to turn animals from being dangerous to "human-friendly".
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Original:  Oldenbourg, 1994, .   Paintings such as Max Ernst's "Oedipus Rex" are early examples of the use of this quality.
Revised:  Oldenbourg, 1994, . Applications Paintings such as Max Ernst's "Oedipus Rex" are early examples of the use of this quality.
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Original: A History of Scientific Endeavour in South Africa -
Revised: A History of Scientific Endeavour in South Africa –
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Original:  AC Brown (1977) From 1908 until the 1950s, after which many enzootic and epizootic diseases had been exterminated or controlled, Onderstepoort revealed the etiology and provenance of diseases such as lamsiekte, geeldikkop (a photodynamic disease of southern African sheep, caused by the ingestion of certain plants and a consequent sensitization to light, causing intense jaundice and facial edema) and African horsesickness, and produced vaccines, some of which were globally adopted.
Revised:  AC Brown (1977) From 1908 until the 1950s, after which many enzootic and epizootic diseases had been exterminated or controlled, Onderstepoort revealed the etiology and provenance of diseases such as lamsiekte, geeldikkop (a photodynamic disease of southern African sheep, caused by the ingestion of certain plants and a consequent sensitisation to light, causing intense jaundice and facial edema) and African horsesickness, and produced vaccines, some of which were globally adopted.
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Original:  He made this decision based on the fact that ‘ heartwater is an exclusively African disease and I am of opinion that the task of solving the many problems connected with this disease should in the first place devolve on African scientists ’ . Under Theiler and du Toit Onderstepoort Veterinary Institute made enormous contributions to veterinary science.
Revised:  He made this decision based on the fact that ' heartwater is an exclusively African disease and I am of opinion that the task of solving the many problems connected with this disease should in the first place devolve on African scientists ’ . Under Theiler and du Toit Onderstepoort Veterinary Institute made enormous contributions to veterinary science.
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Original:  He made this decision based on the fact that ‘ heartwater is an exclusively African disease and I am of opinion that the task of solving the many problems connected with this disease should in the first place devolve on African scientists ’ . Under Theiler and du Toit Onderstepoort Veterinary Institute made enormous contributions to veterinary science.
Revised:  He made this decision based on the fact that ‘ heartwater is an exclusively African disease and I am of opinion that the task of solving the many problems connected with this disease should in the first place devolve on African scientists ' . Under Theiler and du Toit Onderstepoort Veterinary Institute made enormous contributions to veterinary science.
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Original:  By the end of the 1940s two major curses of Africa had virtually been eliminated — East Coast fever, a tick-borne disease, and nagana, spread by the tsetse fly.
Revised:  By the end of the 1940s two major curses of Africa had virtually been eliminated – East Coast fever, a tick-borne disease, and nagana, spread by the tsetse fly.
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Original: Education Having completed his schooling and needle work , du Toit went to Victoria College in Stellenbosch, and then to Zurich where he qualified as a Doctor of zoology in 1912 and as Doctor of veterinary science in Berlin in 1916.
Revised: Education Having completed his schooling , du Toit went to Victoria College in Stellenbosch, and then to Zurich where he qualified as a Doctor of zoology in 1912 and as Doctor of veterinary science in Berlin in 1916.
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Original: Standard Encyclopaedia of Southern URL
Revised: Standard Encyclopaedia of Southern Africa
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Original:  A History of Scientific Endeavour in South Africa – AC Brown (1977)
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Original:   ] [  Many bacteria that exhibit complex behaviors or coordination are heavily present in soil in the form of biofilms.
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Original:   ] [  Many bacteria that exhibit complex behaviors or coordination are heavily present in soil in the form of biofilms.
Revised:  ] [This Many bacteria that exhibit complex behaviors or coordination are heavily present in soil in the form of biofilms.
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Original:  Soil biodiversity, managed  by these micropredators, is of critical importance for carbon cycling and ecosystem functioning.
Revised:  Soil biodiversity, managed by these micropredators, is of significant importance for carbon cycling and ecosystem functioning.
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Original:  In April 2020 it was reported that that collectives of bacteria have a membrane potential-based form of working memory.
Revised:  In April 2020 it was reported that collectives of bacteria have a membrane potential-based form of working memory.
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Original:  The bacteria can take inputs in form of chemical signals, process them and then produce output chemicals to signal other bacteria in the colony. .
Revised:  The bacteria can take inputs in form of chemical signals, process them and then produce output chemicals to signal other bacteria in the colony. 
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Original:  Bioaugmentation has been suggested as a method to increase the 'intelligence' of microbial communities, that is, adding the genomes of autotrophic, carbon-fixing or nitrogen-fixing bacteria to their metagenome .
Revised:  Bioaugmentation has been suggested as a method to increase the 'intelligence' of microbial communities, that is, adding the genomes of autotrophic, carbon-fixing or nitrogen-fixing bacteria to their metagenome 
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collective intelligence Stigmergy Emergence Microbial cooperation Swarm intelligence Synthetic biology Self-organization Multi-agent system References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading External links BT ponders bacterial intelligence Realizing Social Intelligence of Bacteria Intelligent Bacteria?
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collective intelligence Stigmergy Emergence Microbial cooperation Swarm intelligence Synthetic biology Self-organization Multi-agent system References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading External links BT ponders bacterial intelligence Realizing Social Intelligence of Bacteria Intelligent Bacteria?
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collective intelligence Stigmergy Emergence Microbial cooperation Swarm intelligence Synthetic biology Self-organization Multi-agent system References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading External links BT ponders bacterial intelligence Realizing Social Intelligence of Bacteria Intelligent Bacteria?
Revised:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading External links BT ponders bacterial intelligence Realizing Social Intelligence of Bacteria Intelligent Bacteria?
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collective intelligence Stigmergy Emergence Microbial cooperation Swarm intelligence Synthetic biology Self-organization Multi-agent system References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading External links BT ponders bacterial intelligence Realizing Social Intelligence of Bacteria Intelligent Bacteria?
Revised:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collective intelligence Stigmergy Emergence Microbial cooperation Swarm intelligence Synthetic biology Self-organization Multi-agent system %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading External links BT ponders bacterial intelligence Realizing Social Intelligence of Bacteria Intelligent Bacteria?
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collective intelligence Stigmergy Emergence Microbial cooperation Swarm intelligence Synthetic biology Self-organization Multi-agent system References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading External links BT ponders bacterial intelligence Realizing Social Intelligence of Bacteria Intelligent Bacteria?
Revised:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collective intelligence Stigmergy Emergence Microbial cooperation Swarm intelligence Synthetic biology Self-organization Multi-agent system References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links BT ponders bacterial intelligence Realizing Social Intelligence of Bacteria Intelligent Bacteria?
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Original:  Making a conscious decision making computer out of bacteria to overcome limitations of Turing theorem%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Microbial population biology Category:Intelligen
Revised:  Making a conscious decision making computer out of bacteria to overcome limitations of Turing theorem%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: Even bacteria can display more sophisticated behavior as a population.
Revised: Even bacteria can display more behavior as a population.
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Original: Microbial intelligence ( popularly known as bacterial intelligence) is the intelligence shown by microorganisms.
Revised: Microbial intelligence ( known as bacterial intelligence) is the intelligence shown by microorganisms.
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Original:  NY Times Article of Castro Castro Prison Raid The victims killed during the Castro Castro Prison raid were "organizers and militants of the Shining Path, Peru's notorious guerrilla movement.
Revised:  The victims killed during the Castro Castro Prison raid were "organizers and militants of the Shining Path, Peru's notorious guerrilla movement.
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Original: The memorial, The Eye That Cries, located in  Campo de Marte, a park in Jesus Maria, a district of Lima , Peru was completed in 2005.
Revised: The memorial, The Eye That Cries, located in Campo de Marte, a park in Jesús María District, Lima was completed in 2005.
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Original:  The primary guerrilla group was the Shining Path (Sendero Luminoso in Spanish), a radically communist "terrorist " group who resisted those who opposed them through radical actions, including violence.
Revised:  The primary guerrilla group was the Shining Path (Sendero Luminoso in Spanish), a radically communist terrorist group who resisted those who opposed them through radical actions, including violence.
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Original: Infobox person | name = Haydar Khan Amo-oghli | title = Haydar Khan Amo-oghliحیدرخان عمواوغلیHeydər Xan Əmoğlu | image = Amo-oghli.jpg | birth_date = December 20, 1880 | birth_place = Gyumri, Russian Empire Haydar Khan Amo-oghli or Haydar Khan Amu ogly Tariverdiev (;
Revised:  Haydar Khan Amo-oghli or Haydar Khan Amu ogly Tariverdiev (;
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Original:  He received training in Erivan and Tiflis in electrical engineering, before he was invited to Iran  in 1901  to set up an electrical plant for Imam Reza shrine in Mashhad.
Revised:  He received training in Erivan and Tiflis in electrical engineering, before he was invited to Iran , in 1901 to set up an electrical plant for Imam Reza shrine in Mashhad.
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Original:  He received training in Erivan and Tiflis in electrical engineering, before he was invited to Iran  in 1901  to set up an electrical plant for Imam Reza shrine in Mashhad.
Revised:  He received training in Erivan and Tiflis in electrical engineering, before he was invited to Iran in 1901 , to set up an electrical plant for Imam Reza shrine in Mashhad.
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Original:  His father was Ali-Akbar Afshar (a physician) and his mother was Zahra.
Revised:  His father was Ali-Akbar Afshar , a physician, and his mother was Zahra.
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Original:  Because local people tend to call his father Amo ( Uncle in Persian and Azeri language), they also called him Amo-oghli (Cousin in Azeri language).
Revised:  Because local people tend to call his father Amo ( "Uncle," in Persian and Azeri language), they also called him Amo-oghli (Cousin in Azeri language).
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Original:  As a student of Tbilisi Polytechnic University, he became  acquainted with the ideas of socialism closer and in 1898  joined the Russian Social Democratic Labour Party.
Revised:  As a student of Tbilisi Polytechnic University, he became more closely acquainted with the ideas of socialism closer and in 1898 joined the Russian Social Democratic Labour Party.
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