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Original:  General J. Antonio Aguilar: police chief of Antigua Guatemala.
Revised:  General J. Antonio Aguilar: Chief of Police of Antigua Guatemala.
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Original:  Manuel Echeverría y Vidaurre: one of the president  aides.
Revised:  Manuel Echeverría y Vidaurre: one of the president ’s aides.
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Original:  He was the only one that was able to flee the country.
Revised:  He was the only one able to flee the country.
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Original:  Máximo Soto Hall: wealthy poet and politician that spent most of the Estrada Cabrera years writing in his honor.
Revised:  Máximo Soto Hall: wealthy poet and politician who spent most of the Estrada Cabrera years writing in his honor.
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Original:  "Milpas Altas"-: Matamoros Fort commander .
Revised:  "Milpas Altas"-: Commander of Matamoros Fort .
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Original:  He was in charge of bombing Guatemala City during the Tragic Week and was lynched by an angry mob in the Central Square on April 15, 1920.
Revised:  He was responsible for bombing Guatemala City during the Tragic Week and was lynched by an angry mob in the Central Square on April 15, 1920.
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Original:  Col. Salvador Alarcón:  Totonicapán commander . Died in that department on May 10, 1920.
Revised:  Col. Salvador Alarcón: Totonicapán . Died in that department on May 10, 1920.
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Original:  Lieutenant colonel Roderico Anzueto: in 1908 he was one of the cadets that denounced his classmates to the government when they tried to kidnap the President.
Revised:  Lieutenant Colonel Roderico Anzueto: in 1908 he was one of the cadets that denounced his classmates to the government when they tried to kidnap the President.
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Original:  After he was released from prison  he rejoined the Army and was Police Chief of president Jorge Ubico Castañeda .
Revised:  After he was released from prison , he rejoined the Army and was Police Chief of president Jorge Ubico Castañeda .
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Original:  After he was released from prison  he rejoined the Army and was Police Chief of president Jorge Ubico Castañeda .
Revised:  After he was released from prison he rejoined the Army and was President Jorge Ubico Castañeda .
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Original:  Alberto García Estrada: Matamoros Fort second commander who also coordinator the city bombing.
Revised:  Alberto García Estrada: Second in Command of Matamoros Fort who also coordinated the city bombing.
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Original:  José Félix Flores, Jr.: Eduardo Anguiano  friend José Félix Flores: died in combat on April 13, 1920.
Revised:  José Félix Flores, Jr.: Eduardo Anguiano ’s friend José Félix Flores: died in combat on April 13, 1920.
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Original:  Mayor Emilio Méndez: Prison director . Died in combat in Chimaltenango on April 10, 1920.
Revised:  Mayor Emilio Méndez: Prison Director . Died in combat in Chimaltenango on April 10, 1920.
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Original:  Ricardo Sánchez: a relative to the President Gregorio González: second Police chief.
Revised:  Ricardo Sánchez: a relative of the President Gregorio González: second Police chief.
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Original:  Rafael Yaquián: Urban Police chief Gorge I. Galán: Secret Police chief José Santos Chocano: Peruvian poet and close friend of the President General Miguel Larrave: Mazatenango Army commander Brigadier Juan P.
Revised:  Rafael Yaquián: Urban Police Chief Gorge I. Galán: Secret Police chief José Santos Chocano: Peruvian poet and close friend of the President General Miguel Larrave: Mazatenango Army commander Brigadier Juan P.
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Original:  Rafael Yaquián: Urban Police chief Gorge I. Galán: Secret Police chief José Santos Chocano: Peruvian poet and close friend of the President General Miguel Larrave: Mazatenango Army commander Brigadier Juan P.
Revised:  Rafael Yaquián: Urban Police chief Gorge I. Galán: Secret Police Chief José Santos Chocano: Peruvian poet and close friend of the President General Miguel Larrave: Mazatenango Army commander Brigadier Juan P.
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Original:  Rafael Yaquián: Urban Police chief Gorge I. Galán: Secret Police chief José Santos Chocano: Peruvian poet and close friend of the President General Miguel Larrave: Mazatenango Army commander Brigadier Juan P.
Revised:  Rafael Yaquián: Urban Police chief Gorge I. Galán: Secret Police chief José Santos Chocano: Peruvian poet and close friend of the President General Miguel Larrave: Mazatenango Commander in the Army Brigadier Juan P.
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Original: F. Padilla: La Palma defense commander J. Sotero Segura Alfaro: secret police agent Manuel María Girón: Government official Jesús F. Sáenz: President first secretary Col.
Revised: F. Padilla: La Palma Commander of Defense J. Sotero Segura Alfaro: secret police agent Manuel María Girón: Government official Jesús F. Sáenz: President first secretary Col.
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Original: F. Padilla: La Palma defense commander J. Sotero Segura Alfaro: secret police agent Manuel María Girón: Government official Jesús F. Sáenz: President first secretary Col.
Revised: F. Padilla: La Palma defense commander J. Sotero Segura Alfaro: secret police agent Manuel María Girón: government official Jesús F. Sáenz: President first secretary Col.
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Original: F. Padilla: La Palma defense commander J. Sotero Segura Alfaro: secret police agent Manuel María Girón: Government official Jesús F. Sáenz: President first secretary Col.
Revised: F. Padilla: La Palma defense commander J. Sotero Segura Alfaro: secret police agent Manuel María Girón: Government official Jesús F. Sáenz: First Secretary to the President Col.
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Original:  Angel Santis: friend of the President Felipe Márquez: Estrada Cabrera  secret agent Gerardo Márquez: son of Felipe Marquez and a convicted felon for murder Col.
Revised:  Angel Santis: friend of the President Felipe Márquez: Estrada Cabrera ’s secret agent Gerardo Márquez: son of Felipe Marquez and a convicted felon for murder Col.
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Original:  Angel Santis: friend of the President Felipe Márquez: Estrada Cabrera  secret agent Gerardo Márquez: son of Felipe Marquez and a convicted felon for murder Col.
Revised:  Angel Santis: friend of the President Felipe Márquez: Estrada Cabrera secret agent Gerardo Márquez: son of Felipe Marquez and a convicted murderer Col.
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Original:  Manuel de León Arriaga: Army artillery second commander Gilberto Mancilla: coronel Eduardo Anguiano aide Col.
Revised:  Manuel de León Arriaga: Second in Command of the Army Artillery Gilberto Mancilla: coronel Eduardo Anguiano aide Col.
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Original:  Manuel de León Arriaga: Army artillery second commander Gilberto Mancilla: coronel Eduardo Anguiano aide Col.
Revised:  Manuel de León Arriaga: Army artillery second commander Gilberto Mancilla: Coronel Eduardo Anguiano’s aide Col.
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Original:  José Pineda Chavarría: Post Office director Heberto Correa: university student and secret police undercover agent Lieutenant colonel Carlos de León Régil: police officer Andrés Largaespada: writer who defended the President in the newspapers Brigadier Enrique Aris: secret police agen
Revised:  José Pineda Chavarría: Director of the Post Office Heberto Correa: university student and secret police undercover agent Lieutenant colonel Carlos de León Régil: police officer Andrés Largaespada: writer who defended the President in the newspapers Brigadier Enrique Aris: secret police agen
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Original:  José Pineda Chavarría: Post Office director Heberto Correa: university student and secret police undercover agent Lieutenant colonel Carlos de León Régil: police officer Andrés Largaespada: writer who defended the President in the newspapers Brigadier Enrique Aris: secret police agen
Revised:  José Pineda Chavarría: Post Office director Heberto Correa: university student and secret police undercover agent Lieutenant Colonel Carlos de León Régil: police officer Andrés Largaespada: writer who defended the President in the newspapers Brigadier Enrique Aris: secret police agen
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Original:  He based his power entirely on the support of the military , even though he was a civilian, and when the country declared war on Germany during the First World War, he took advantage of the opportunity to increase his already well-equipped artillery by the addition of modern field guns, machine guns and ammunition.
Revised:  Even though he was a civilian, he based his power entirely on the support of the military , even though he was a civilian, and when the country declared war on Germany during the First World War, he took advantage of the opportunity to increase his already well-equipped artillery by the addition of modern field guns, machine guns and ammunition.
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Original:  He based his power entirely on the support of the military , even though he was a civilian, and when the country declared war on Germany during the First World War, he took advantage of the opportunity to increase his already well-equipped artillery by the addition of modern field guns, machine guns and ammunition.
Revised:  He based his power entirely on the support of the military . By declaring war on Germany during the First World War, he took advantage of the opportunity to increase his already well-equipped artillery by the addition of modern field guns, machine guns and ammunition.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He based his power entirely on the support of the military , even though he was a civilian, and when the country declared war on Germany during the First World War, he took advantage of the opportunity to increase his already well-equipped artillery by the addition of modern field guns, machine guns and ammunition.
Revised:  He based his power entirely on the support of the military , even though he was a civilian, and when the country declared war on Germany during the First World War, he concocted a reason to increase his already well-equipped artillery by the addition of modern field guns, machine guns and ammunition.
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Original: Opposition to his regime started after the 1917-1918 earthquakes  as it was evident that the President was incapable of leading recovery efforts.
Revised: Opposition to his regime started after the 1917-1918 earthquakes , as it was evident that the President was incapable of leading recovery efforts.
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Original:   Bishop of Facelli, Piñol y Batres from the Aycinena family, began preaching against government policies in the San Francisco Church in 1919, instructed by his cousin, Manuel Cobos Batres.
Revised:  Urged by his cousin, Manuel Cobos Batres, the Bishop of Facelli, Piñol y Batres from the Aycinena family, began preaching against government policies in the San Francisco Church in 1919, instructed by his cousin, Manuel Cobos Batres.
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Original:   Bishop of Facelli, Piñol y Batres from the Aycinena family, began preaching against government policies in the San Francisco Church in 1919, instructed by his cousin, Manuel Cobos Batres.
Revised:  Bishop of Facelli, Piñol y Batres from the Aycinena family, began preaching against government policies in the San Francisco Church in 1919.
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Original:  Additionally, Cobos Batres was able to inflame the national sentiment of conservative criollo leaders José Azmitia, Tácito Molina, Eduardo Camacho, Julio Bianchi and Emilio Escamilla into forming a Central American Unionist party and opposing the strong-arm regime of Estrada Cabrera.
Revised:  Additionally, Cobos Batres was able to inspire the national sentiment of conservative criollo leaders José Azmitia, Tácito Molina, Eduardo Camacho, Julio Bianchi and Emilio Escamilla into forming a Central American Unionist party and opposing the strong-arm regime of Estrada Cabrera.
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Original:  Additionally, Cobos Batres was able to inflame the national sentiment of conservative criollo leaders José Azmitia, Tácito Molina, Eduardo Camacho, Julio Bianchi and Emilio Escamilla into forming a Central American Unionist party and opposing the strong-arm regime of Estrada Cabrera.
Revised:  Additionally, Cobos Batres was able to inflame the national sentiment of conservative criollo leaders José Azmitia, Tácito Molina, Eduardo Camacho, Emilio Escamilla, and also Julio Bianchi, into forming a Central American Unionist party and opposing the strong-arm regime of Estrada Cabrera.
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Original:  Mail. AOL Mail, as well as other Exchange Server and IMAP accounts  can still be added, and POP3 support has returned.
Revised:  Mail. AOL Mail, as well as other Exchange Server and IMAP accounts , can still be added, and POP3 support has returned.
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Original:  Mail and Calendar are still Universal Windows apps and are in the same app container . But their third sibling, People, is moved out of this container and is a standalone app by itself.
Revised:  Mail and Calendar are still Universal Windows apps and are in the same app container , but their third sibling, People, is moved out of this container and is a standalone app by itself.
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Original: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts  and other data.
Revised: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts and other data.
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Original: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts  and other data.
Revised: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts and other data.
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Original: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts  and other data.
Revised: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista ( then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts and other data.
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Original: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts  and other data.
Revised: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts and other data.
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Original: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts  and other data.
Revised: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " ). Outlook Express 7 introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts and other data.
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Original: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts  and other data.
Revised: Windows Vista A screenshot of Windows Mail displaying a user's Inbox folder|left The origins of Windows Mail can be traced back to a pre-release version of Outlook Express 7 included in early builds of Windows Vista , then known by its codename, "Longhorn . " This version of Outlook Express introduced various changes to the user interface and relied on WinFS for the management and storage of contacts , email, and other data.
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Original:  While retaining support for Post Office Protocol (POP) and Internet Message Access Protocol (IMAP) email protocols, Outlook Express 7 dropped support for Microsoft's proprietary mail over HTTP scheme.
Revised:  It supported Post Office Protocol (POP) and Internet Message Access Protocol (IMAP) email protocols, Outlook Express 7 dropped support for Microsoft's proprietary mail over HTTP scheme.
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Original:  While retaining support for Post Office Protocol (POP) and Internet Message Access Protocol (IMAP) email protocols, Outlook Express 7 dropped support for Microsoft's proprietary mail over HTTP scheme.
Revised:  While retaining support for Post Office Protocol (POP) and Internet Message Access Protocol (IMAP) email protocols, but no longer supported Microsoft's proprietary mail over HTTP scheme.
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Original:  It is insteadstored alongside the mail itself , making it possible to  copy an entire Windows Mail configuration and mail store to another machine in a single step.
Revised:  It is insteadstored alongside the mail itself , making it possible to simply copy an entire Windows Mail configuration and mail store to another machine in a single step.
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Original:  It is insteadstored alongside the mail itself , making it possible to  copy an entire Windows Mail configuration and mail store to another machine in a single step.
Revised:  It is insteadstored alongside the mail itself , making it possible to copy an entire email store to another machine in a single step.
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Original:  Removed features from Windows Mail include: Support for WebDAV protocol Support for multiple Identities, collection of configurations and email message that could be loaded independent of each other but could be switched at any time Support for spell checking dictionaries of Microsoft Office Windows Mail has a documented application programming interface (API) based on Component Object Model (COM).
Revised:  Windows Mail has a documented application programming interface (API) based on Component Object Model (COM).
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Original:  Removed features from Windows Mail include: Support for WebDAV protocol Support for multiple Identities, collection of configurations and email message that could be loaded independent of each other but could be switched at any time Support for spell checking dictionaries of Microsoft Office Windows Mail has a documented application programming interface (API) based on Component Object Model (COM).
Revised:  Removed features from Windows Mail include: Support for WebDAV protocol Support for multiple Identities, collection of configurations and email message that could be loaded independent of each other but could be switched at any time Support for spell checking dictionaries of Microsoft Office Windows Mail has a documented application programming interface (API) based on Component Object Model (COM).
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Original:  While its predecessor, Outlook Express, also featured an API, it was undocumented, except for Simple MAPI messaging functionality  .
Revised:  Except for Simple MAPI messaging functionality .
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Original:  While its predecessor, Outlook Express, also featured an API, it was undocumented, except for Simple MAPI messaging functionality  .
Revised:  While its predecessor, Outlook Express, also featured an API, it was undocumented, except for Simple MAPI messaging functionality , the API of Outlook Express was undocumented .
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Original:  It is a successor to Outlook Express, which was either included with  or released for Internet Explorer 3.0 and later  .
Revised:  It is a successor to Outlook Express, which was either included with , or released for Internet Explorer 3.0 and later .
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Original:  It is a successor to Outlook Express, which was either included with  or released for Internet Explorer 3.0 and later  .
Revised:  It is a successor to Outlook Express, which was either included with or released for Internet Explorer 3.0 and later versions of Internet Explorer .
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Original:  Despite being branded as the successor to Outlook Express, Windows Mail is a fundamentally new application with significant feature additions (many which were previously exclusive to Internet Explorer or Microsoft Outlook)  the storage architecture , and security mechanisms.
Revised:  Despite being branded as the successor to Outlook Express, Windows Mail is a fundamentally new application with significant feature additions (many which were previously exclusive to Internet Explorer or Microsoft Outlook) the storage architecture and security mechanisms.
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Original:  Windows Mail is  intended to be a significantly more secure offering than Outlook Express by including Bayesian spam filtering, email attachment blocking, junk email filtering functionality of Microsoft Exchange, the Phishing Filter of Internet Explorer 7, and top-level domain blocking.
Revised:  Windows Mail is also intended to be a significantly more secure offering than Outlook Express by including Bayesian spam filtering, email attachment blocking, junk email filtering functionality of Microsoft Exchange, the Phishing Filter of Internet Explorer 7, and top-level domain blocking.
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Original:   Windows 8.x Mail was added to Windows 8 as one of many apps written to run full-screen or half-screen, per Microsoft's Metro design language philosophy .
Revised:  Windows 8.x Mail in Windows 8 as one of many apps written to run full-screen or half-screen, per Microsoft's Metro design language philosophy .
Edit intent: clarity