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Original:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis  and the former CEO of eBay  Meg Whitman.
Revised:  When asked whom they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis and the former CEO of eBay Meg Whitman.
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Original:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis  and the former CEO of eBay  Meg Whitman.
Revised:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people to rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis and the former CEO of eBay Meg Whitman.
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Original:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis  and the former CEO of eBay  Meg Whitman.
Revised:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators . McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis and the former CEO of eBay Meg Whitman.
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Original:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis  and the former CEO of eBay  Meg Whitman.
Revised:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis and the former CEO of eBay Meg Whitman.
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Original:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis  and the former CEO of eBay  Meg Whitman.
Revised:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people : the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis and the former CEO of eBay Meg Whitman.
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Original:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis  and the former CEO of eBay  Meg Whitman.
Revised:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus ; Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis and the former CEO of eBay Meg Whitman.
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Original:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis  and the former CEO of eBay  Meg Whitman.
Revised:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis ; and the former CEO of eBay Meg Whitman.
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Original:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis  and the former CEO of eBay  Meg Whitman.
Revised:  When asked who they believed were the three wisest people they would rely on as president, Obama answered that his wife and grandmother were at the top of his list along with a mix of Republican and Democratic Senators , McCain comprised his list of a broad range of people including the architect of the troop surge in Iraq, General David Petraeus , Democratic Congressman and civil rights leader John Lewis and the former CEO of eBay , Meg Whitman.
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Original:  For their toughest decision in life, Obama answered that deciding to oppose the Iraq War in 2002 was his toughest, while McCain stated that his refusal to leave his men behind in a POW camp in Vietnam when given the chance was the toughest decision he ever made .
Revised:  In response to being questioned about their toughest decisions in life, Obama answered that deciding to oppose the Iraq War in 2002 was his toughest, while McCain stated that his refusal to leave his men behind in a POW camp in Vietnam when given the chance was the toughest decision he ever made .
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Original:  For their toughest decision in life, Obama answered that deciding to oppose the Iraq War in 2002 was his toughest, while McCain stated that his refusal to leave his men behind in a POW camp in Vietnam when given the chance was the toughest decision he ever made .
Revised:  For their toughest decision in life, Obama answered that deciding to oppose the Iraq War in 2002 was his toughest, while McCain cited his refusal to leave his men behind in a POW camp in Vietnam when given the chance was the toughest decision he ever made .
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Original:  For their toughest decision in life, Obama answered that deciding to oppose the Iraq War in 2002 was his toughest, while McCain stated that his refusal to leave his men behind in a POW camp in Vietnam when given the chance was the toughest decision he ever made .
Revised:  For their toughest decision in life, Obama answered that deciding to oppose the Iraq War in 2002 was his toughest, while McCain stated that his refusal to leave his men behind in a POW camp in Vietnam when given the chance .
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Original:  When asked when they believed individuals should be given human rights, Obama responded that the question was "above [his] pay grade" while McCain sharply replied that he believed it should occur "at the moment of conception."
Revised:  When asked when they believed individuals should be given human rights, Obama responded that the question was "above [his] pay grade" while McCain decisively replied that he believed it should occur "at the moment of conception."
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Original:  On the concept of evil, Obama related it to the situation in Darfur and on America's streets pointing out his belief that evil should be "confront" . McCain related it to radical Islamic extremism relaying that he believed evil should be "defeated."
Revised:  On the concept of evil, Obama related it to the situation in Darfur and on America's streets . McCain related it to radical Islamic extremism relaying that he believed evil should be "defeated."
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Original:  They both answered that the biggest moral dilemmas in their life were personal mistakes they  made when they were younger.
Revised:  They both answered that the biggest moral dilemmas in their lives were personal mistakes they made when they were younger.
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Original:  They both answered that the biggest moral dilemmas in their life were personal mistakes they  made when they were younger.
Revised:  They both answered that the biggest moral dilemmas in their life were personal mistakes they had made when they were younger.
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Original:  For Obama  it was his drug use, for McCain it was his failed first marriage.
Revised:  For Obama , it was his drug use, for McCain it was his failed first marriage.
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Original: Pervez Musharraf Pervez Musharraf,  who was facing impeachment, has announced in a speech that was broadcast on nation television that he will resign from his position as President of Pakistan.
Revised: Pervez Musharraf Pervez Musharraf, the Pakistani president who was facing impeachment, has announced in a speech that was broadcast on nation television that he will resign from his position as President of Pakistan.
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Original: Pervez Musharraf Pervez Musharraf, the Pakistani president who was facing impeachment, has announced in a speech that was broadcast on nation television that he will resign from his position as President of Pakistan.
Revised: Pervez Musharraf Pervez Musharraf, the Pakistani president who was facing impeachment, has announced in a speech that was broadcast on national television that he will resign from his position as President of Pakistan.
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Original:  He was facing impeachment for allegedly engaging in violation of the constitution and gross misconduct.
Revised:  He was facing impeachment on charges of violating the constitution and gross misconduct.
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Original:  The hour long speech started at 13:00 local time (07:00 UTC), and it consisted of Musharraf explaining, in Urdu, his reasons for resigning.
Revised:  The hour-long speech started at 13:00 local time (07:00 UTC), and it consisted of Musharraf explaining, in Urdu, his reasons for resigning.
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Original: Pervez Musharraf Pervez Musharraf , the Pakistani president who was facing impeachment, has announced in a speech that was broadcast  on national television that he will resign from his position as President of Pakistan.
Revised: Pervez Musharraf Pervez Musharraf announced in a speech that was broadcast on national television that he will resign from his position as President of Pakistan.
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Original:  He was facing impeachment on charges of violating the constitution and gross misconduct.
Revised:  He had been facing impeachment on charges of violating the constitution and gross misconduct.
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Original:  The hour-long speech started at 13:00 local time (07:00 UTC) , and itconsisted of Musharraf explaining, in Urdu, his reasons for resigning  . "If I was doing this just for myself, I might have chosen a different course," he said, in the beginning parts of the speech.
Revised:  The hour-long speech started at 13:00 local time (07:00 UTC) . In it, Musharraf explained his reasons for resigning . "If I was doing this just for myself, I might have chosen a different course," he said, in the beginning parts of the speech.
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Original:  The hour-long speech started at 13:00 local time (07:00 UTC) , and itconsisted of Musharraf explaining, in Urdu, his reasons for resigning  . "If I was doing this just for myself, I might have chosen a different course," he said, in the beginning parts of the speech.
Revised:  The hour-long speech started at 13:00 local time (07:00 UTC) , and itconsisted of Musharraf explaining, in Urdu, his reasons for resigning . "If I was doing this just for myself, I might have chosen a different course," he said, early in the speech.
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Original:  The former President then said that " Even if I beat this impeachment, relations between the presidency and the government can never be fixed , " continuing to explain his reasons for resigning.
Revised:  The former President explained that, " Even if I beat this impeachment, relations between the presidency and the government can never be fixed , " continuing to explain his reasons for resigning.
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Original:  The former President then said that " Even if I beat this impeachment, relations between the presidency and the government can never be fixed , " continuing to explain his reasons for resigning.
Revised:  The former President then said that " even if I beat this impeachment, relations between the presidency and the government can never be fixed , " continuing to explain his reasons for resigning.
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Original:  The former President then said that " Even if I beat this impeachment, relations between the presidency and the government can never be fixed , " continuing to explain his reasons for resigning.
Revised:  The former President then said that " Even if I beat this impeachment, relations between the presidency and the government can never be fixed . " continuing to explain his reasons for resigning.
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Original:  The former President then said that " Even if I beat this impeachment, relations between the presidency and the government can never be fixed , " continuing to explain his reasons for resigning.
Revised:  The former President then said that " Even if I beat this impeachment, relations between the presidency and the government can never be fixed , " 
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Original:  "Not a single charge can be proved against me," he said, emphasizing this belief .
Revised:  "Not a single charge can be proved against me," he emphasized .
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Original:  In it, Musharraf explained  his reasons for resigning in Urdu .
Revised:  In it, Musharraf explained in Urdu his reasons for resigning in Urdu .
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Original:  The hour-long speech started at 13:00 local time (07:00 UTC).
Revised:  (07:00 UTC).
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Original: Pervez Musharraf Pervez Musharraf announced in a speech that was broadcast today on national television that he will resign from his position as President of Pakistan.
Revised: Pervez Musharraf Pervez Musharraf announced in a speech that was broadcast today on national television that he will resign from his position as of Pakistan.
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Original:  He had been facing impeachment on charges of violating the constitution and gross misconduct.
Revised:  He had been facing on charges of violating the constitution and gross misconduct.
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Original:  He had been facing impeachment on charges of violating the constitution and gross misconduct.
Revised:  He had been facing impeachment on charges of violating the and gross misconduct.
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Original:  The hour-long speech started at 13:00 local time (07:00 UTC ).
Revised:  The hour-long speech started at 13:00 local time (07:00 ).
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Original:  In it, Musharraf explained in Urdu his reasons for resigning.
Revised:  In it, Musharraf explained in his reasons for resigning.
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Original:  He said that he believes that "pillars of the state – parliament and the judiciary – would be harmed and, God forbid, the army might have been dragged in," if he did not resign.
Revised:  He said that he believes that "pillars of the state — parliament and the judiciary – would be harmed and, God forbid, the army might have been dragged in," if he did not resign.
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Original:  He said that he believes that "pillars of the state – parliament and the judiciary – would be harmed and, God forbid, the army might have been dragged in," if he did not resign.
Revised:  He said that he believes that "pillars of the state – parliament and the judiciary — would be harmed and, God forbid, the army might have been dragged in," if he did not resign.
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Original: Robert Jackson Yates, the former manager of the New Zealand and Australian New Wave band Mi-Sex  has been sentenced to a four year jail sentence after pleading guilty to having sex with a minor.
Revised: Robert Jackson Yates, the former manager of the New Zealand and Australian New Wave band Mi-Sex , has been sentenced to a four year jail sentence after pleading guilty to having sex with a minor.
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Original: Robert Jackson Yates, the former manager of the New Zealand and Australian New Wave band Mi-Sex  has been sentenced to a four year jail sentence after pleading guilty to having sex with a minor.
Revised: Robert Jackson Yates, the former manager of the New Zealand and Australian New Wave band Mi-Sex has been sentenced to a four-year jail sentence after pleading guilty to having sex with a minor.
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Original:  The Victorian County Court heard that Yates, 62, met the girl through a website named Adult Friend Finder, where she claimed to be 18 on her profile but in email exchanges revealed her true age as 15.
Revised:  The Victorian County Court heard that Yates, 62, met the girl through a website named Adult Friend Finder, where she claimed on her profile but in email exchanges revealed her true age as 15.
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Original:  The Victorian County Court heard that Yates, 62, met the girl through a website named Adult Friend Finder, where she claimed to be 18 on her profile but in email exchanges revealed her true age as 15.
Revised:  The Victorian County Court heard that Yates, 62, met the girl through a website named Adult Friend Finder, where she claimed to be 18 on her profile but in email exchanges revealed her true age is 15.
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Original:  The following day, the girl told her mother, who  contacted police.
Revised:  The following day, the girl told her mother, who then contacted police.
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Original:  Yates pleaded guilty to two counts each of committing indecent acts with a child under 16 and of sexual penetration of a child under 16, and was given a four year sentence , with a minimum of two years prison .
Revised:  Yates pleaded guilty to two counts each of committing indecent acts with a child under 16 and of sexual penetration of a child under 16, and was sentenced to a four year sentence , with a minimum of two years prison .
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Original:  Yates pleaded guilty to two counts each of committing indecent acts with a child under 16 and of sexual penetration of a child under 16, and was given a four year sentence , with a minimum of two years prison .
Revised:  Yates pleaded guilty to two counts each of committing indecent acts with a child under 16 and of sexual penetration of a child under 16, and was given a four year prison term , with a minimum of two years prison .
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Original:  Yates pleaded guilty to two counts each of committing indecent acts with a child under 16 and of sexual penetration of a child under 16, and was given a four year sentence , with a minimum of two years prison .
Revised:  Yates pleaded guilty to two counts each of committing indecent acts with a child under 16 and of sexual penetration of a child under 16, and was given a four year sentence , with a minimum of two years in prison before he is eligible for parole .
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Original:  The band Mi-Sex was popular in Australia and New Zealand in the 1980s, most notably for their number 1 hit single "Computer Games"
Revised:  The band Mi-Sex was popular in Australia and New Zealand in the 1980s, most notably for their number one hit single "Computer Games"
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Original: Judge Meryl Sexton said that Yates must have known the girl was underage, and that the blame lay solely on Jackson's shoulders.
Revised: Judge Meryl Sexton said that Yates must have known the girl was underage, and that the blame lay solely on his shoulders.
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Original:  However despite two early goals for the Republic of Ireland, the Israelis still managed to claw back a draw - much to the dismay of on looking Irish supporters.
Revised:  However despite two early goals for the Republic of Ireland, the Israelis still managed to claw back a draw - much to the dismay of onlooking Irish supporters.
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Original:  The Irish became increasingly frustrated as the game progressed because of perceived Israelis time-wasting.
Revised:  The Irish became increasingly frustrated as the game progressed because of perceived Israeli time-wasting.
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Original:  The game finished 2-2, much to the despair of the Irish squad, who now can only draw encouragement from the fact that they remain ahead of France in the group tabl
Revised:  The game finished 2-2, much to the despair of the Irish squad, who now can only draw encouragement from the fact that they remain ahead of France in the group table
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Original: Chairman of the Senate of Pakistan, Muhammad Mian Soomro, took over as Acting President of Pakistan after the departure of President Pervez Musharraf ’s.
Revised: Chairman of the Senate of Pakistan, Muhammad Mian Soomro, took over as Acting President of Pakistan after the departure of President Pervez Musharraf 
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Original:  The presidential election would be held on September 6, 2008.
Revised:  's. An election will be held on September 6, 2008.
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Original:  Pesident Musharraf resigned after remaining in power for nine years.
Revised:  President Musharraf resigned after remaining in power for nine years.
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Original:  An election will be held on September 6. Related new
Revised:  The presidential election would be held on September 6. Related new
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Original:  An election will be held on September 6. Related new
Revised:  An election will be held on September Related new
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