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Original: Pat Norita, nee Noriyuki Morita, who was best known for his work in the 1980's hit The Karate Kid , and its sequels, passed away on Thanksgiving day.
Revised: Pat Norita, nee Noriyuki Morita, who was best known for his work in the 1980's hit The Karate Kid and its sequels, passed away on Thanksgiving day.
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Original:  The cause of death is not yet confirmed, but was said to be natural causes . Pat started out at a stand up comedian in the 1960's, and styled himself the "Hip Nip".
Revised:  The cause of death is not yet confirmed, but was said to be natural . Pat started out at a stand up comedian in the 1960's, and styled himself the "Hip Nip".
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Original:  The cause of death is not yet confirmed, but was said to be natural causes . Pat started out at a stand up comedian in the 1960's, and styled himself the "Hip Nip".
Revised:  The cause of death is not yet confirmed, but was said to be natural causes . Pat started out at a stand-up comedian in the 1960's, and styled himself the "Hip Nip".
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Original:  "'Hip Nip' just sounds groovy," Morita is quoted as saying "A drummer laid it on me."
Revised:  "'Hip Nip' just sounds groovy," Morita said "A drummer laid it on me."
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Original:  His career took off, and he became a regular on the show "Happy Days" as the Arnoldof Arnold's Restaurant  fame.
Revised:  His career took off, and he became a regular on the show "Happy Days" as "Arnold" of " Arnold's Restaurant fame.
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Original:  His career took off, and he became a regular on the show "Happy Days" as the Arnoldof Arnold's Restaurant  fame.
Revised:  His career took off, and he became a regular on the show "Happy Days" as the Arnoldof Arnold's Restaurant " fame.
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Original:  From that show came a spin off series of his own, called "Mr. T and Tina" which unfortunately never took off.
Revised:  From the show came a spin off series of his own, called "Mr. T and Tina" which unfortunately never took off.
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Original:  From that show came a spin off series of his own, called "Mr. T and Tina" which unfortunately never took off.
Revised:  From that show came a spin off series of his own, called "Mr. T and Tina" which never took off.
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Original:  However, Pat's career continued on , and he starred in several TV movies including Amos and a 1987-88 tv police drama called Ohara.
Revised:  However, Pat's career continued , and he starred in several TV movies including Amos and a 1987-88 tv police drama called Ohara.
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Original:  However, Pat's career continued on , and he starred in several TV movies including Amos and a 1987-88 tv police drama called Ohara.
Revised:  However, Pat's career continued on , and he starred in several TV movies including "Amos" and a 1987-88 tv police drama called Ohara.
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Original:  However, Pat's career continued on , and he starred in several TV movies including Amos and a 1987-88 tv police drama called Ohara.
Revised:  However, Pat's career continued on , and he starred in several TV movies including Amos and a 1987-88 made-for-TV police drama called Ohara.
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Original:  Then, with his magnificent performance in Karate Kid, he went on to be nominated for an Acadamy Award.
Revised:  Then, for his acclaimed performance in Karate Kid, he went on to be nominated for an Acadamy Award.
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Original:  Then, with his magnificent performance in Karate Kid, he went on to be nominated for an Acadamy Award.
Revised:  Then, with his magnificent performance in Karate Kid, he was nominated for an Acadamy Award.
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Original:  He was the first Asian American ever to be so honored.
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Original:  At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the varioius Karate Kid sequels, and also as voice talent in the Disney films Mulan and Mulan II . Morita was beloved by many children of the 80's, and remains today a popular icon.
Revised:  At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the Karate Kid sequels, and also as voice talent in the Disney films Mulan and Mulan II . Morita was beloved by many children of the 80's, and remains today a popular icon.
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Original:  At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the varioius Karate Kid sequels, and also as voice talent in the Disney films Mulan and Mulan II . Morita was beloved by many children of the 80's, and remains today a popular icon.
Revised:  At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the varioius Karate Kid sequels, and also as a character in the Disney films Mulan and Mulan II . Morita was beloved by many children of the 80's, and remains today a popular icon.
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Original:  At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the varioius Karate Kid sequels, and also as voice talent in the Disney films Mulan and Mulan II . Morita was beloved by many children of the 80's, and remains today a popular icon.
Revised:  At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the varioius Karate Kid sequels, and also as voice talent in the Disney films "Mulan" and "Mulan II" . Morita was beloved by many children of the 80's, and remains today a popular icon.
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Original:  At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the varioius Karate Kid sequels, and also as voice talent in the Disney films Mulan and Mulan II . Morita was beloved by many children of the 80's, and remains today a popular icon.
Revised:  At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the varioius Karate Kid sequels, and also as voice talent in the Disney films Mulan and Mulan II . Morita was beloved by many children of the 80's, and remains a popular icon.
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Original: Pat Norita , nee Noriyuki Morita, who was best known for his work in the 1980's hit The Karate Kid and its sequels, passed away on Thanksgiving day.
Revised: Pat Morita , nee Noriyuki Morita, who was best known for his work in the 1980's hit The Karate Kid and its sequels, passed away on Thanksgiving day.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  His career took off, and he became a regular on the show "Happy Days " as "Arnold" of "Arnold's Restaurant" fame.
Revised:  His career took off, and he became a regular on the show Happy Days as "Arnold" of "Arnold's Restaurant" fame.
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Original:  From the show came a spin off series of his own, called " Mr. T and Tina " which never took off .
Revised:  He also acted in the show Mr. T and Tina " which never took off .
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Original: At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the Karate Kid sequels, and also as a  character in the Disney films "Mulan" and "Mulan II".
Revised: At his death, Morita had over 100 screen credits, including the Karate Kid sequels, and also as a voice character in the Disney films "Mulan" and "Mulan II".
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Original:  Their current weather are expected to improve
Revised:  Their current weather is expected to improve
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Original: Due to two days of heavy rain caused severe floods in Sri Lanka, an island in the India Ocean, off of southeast of India.
Revised: Two days of heavy rain caused severe floods in Sri Lanka, an island in the India Ocean, off of southeast of India.
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Original: Due to two days of heavy rain caused severe floods in Sri Lanka, an island in the India Ocean, off of southeast of India.
Revised: Due to two days of heavy rain caused severe floods in Sri Lanka, an island in the Indian Ocean, off of southeast of India.
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Original:  These floods were an additional bitter blow to the victims of last year’s tsunami whom are living in temporary shelters;
Revised:  These floods were an additional bitter blow to the victims of last year’s tsunami who are living in temporary shelters;
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Original:  The two officers who ordered the burning of the bodies were repreimanded for lacking cultural and religious sensitivity.
Revised:  The two officers who ordered the burning of the bodies were reprimanded for lacking cultural and religious sensitivity.
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Original:  The two soldiers responsible for recording a message bousting about the act of burning the bodies and broadcast it on loudspeakers will face non-judicial punishment, which may include a loss of pay or demotion in rank.
Revised:  The two soldiers responsible for recording a message bousting about the act of the burning and broadcasting it on loudspeakers will face non-judicial punishment, which may include a loss of pay or demotion in rank.
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Original:  No criminal charges were pressed against any of the soldiers involved .
Revised:  An Afghan investigation into the matter that was ordered by President Hamid Karzai has also been completed, although the results have not been released .
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Original: The US army investigation concluded that there was no intent to desecrete the bodies as the intention behind the burnigs were hygenic reasons.
Revised: The US army investigation concluded that there was no intent to desecrete the bodies as the intention behind the burnings were hygenic reasons.
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Original: Four US soldiers involved in the burning of two dead Taliban bodies and the broadcasting about the act to taunt Taliban fighters on October 1st now face disciplinary action  .
Revised: Four US soldiers involved in the burning of two dead Taliban bodies on October 1st now face disciplinary action .
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Original: Four US soldiers involved in the burning of two dead Taliban bodies and the broadcasting about the act to taunt Taliban fighters on October 1st now face disciplinary action  .
Revised: Four US soldiers involved in the burning of two dead Taliban bodies and the broadcasting about the act to taunt Taliban fighters on October 1st now face disciplinary action for their actions .
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Original: Four US soldiers involved in the burning of two dead Taliban bodies on October 1st now face disciplinary action for their actions.
Revised: Four US soldiers involved in the burning of two dead Taliban bodies on October 1st now face disciplinary measures for their actions.
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Original:  Jennifer Garner has won a Golden Globe and a Screen Actors Guilde award for her performances in the show.
Revised:  Jennifer Garner has won a Golden Globe and a Screen Actors Guild award for her performances in the show.
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Original: The American TV show Alias will end in May 2006 after five seasons, ABC said Wednesday .
Revised: The American TV show Alias will end in May 2006 after five seasons, ABC said Gamer .
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Original:  No reason for the cancellation has been given.
Revised:  No reason for the fart has been given.
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Original: Alias stars Jennifer Garner as top secret CIA agent Sydney Bristow.
Revised: Alias stars oiuifop as top secret CIA agent Sydney Bristow.
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Original: John Hospers John Hospers, the Libertarian Party's first presidential nominee  died from natural causes on June 12 at the age of 93.
Revised: John Hospers John Hospers, the Libertarian Party's first presidential nominee , died from natural causes on June 12 at the age of 93.
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Original:  The 2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee Wayne Allyn Root, who had struck up a friendship with Hospers, reported the matter via his personal blog  and on Facebook:
Revised:  The 2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee Wayne Allyn Root, who had struck up a friendship with Hospers, reported the matter via his personal blog , and on Facebook:
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Original: In recent years, Hospers was active on Facebook .
Revised: In recent years, Hospers was active on .
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Original: John Hospers John Hospers, the Libertarian Party's first presidential nominee, died from natural causes on Sunday aged 93.
Revised: John Hospers John Hospers, the Libertarian Party's first presidential nominee, died Sunday of natural causes at 93.
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Original:  The 2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee Wayne Allyn Root, who had struck up a friendship with Hospers, reported the matter via his personal blog, and on Facebook : He later added:  In recent years, Hospers was active on .
Revised:  2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee Wayne Allyn Root, who had struck up a friendship with Hospers, reported the matter via his personal blog, and on Facebook : He later added: In recent years, Hospers was active on .
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Original:  The 2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee Wayne Allyn Root, who had struck up a friendship with Hospers, reported the matter via his personal blog, and on Facebook : He later added:  In recent years, Hospers was active on .
Revised:  The 2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee Wayne Allyn Root, who was a friend of Hospers, reported the matter via his personal blog, and on Facebook : He later added: In recent years, Hospers was active on .
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Original:  The 2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee Wayne Allyn Root, who had struck up a friendship with Hospers, reported the matter via his personal blog, and on Facebook : He later added:  In recent years, Hospers was active on .
Revised:  The 2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee Wayne Allyn Root, who had struck up a friendship with Hospers, reported the death via his personal blog, and on Facebook : He later added: In recent years, Hospers was active on .
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Original:  In his final post on Saturday, he thanked his friends after celebrating his ninety-third birthday two days earlier
Revised:  In his final post on Saturday, he thanked his friends after celebrating his 93rd birthday two days earlier
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Original: John Hospers , the  's first presidential nominee, died Sunday of natural causes at 93. 2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee , who was a friend of Hospers, reported the death via his personal blog, and on Facebook, writing: "I have sad news to report ...
Revised: John Hospers , the United States 's first presidential nominee, died Sunday of natural causes at 93. 2008 Libertarian Party Vice Presidential nominee , who was a friend of Hospers, reported the death via his personal blog, and on Facebook, writing: "I have sad news to report ...
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Original: 250px|Critical Mass crowd Brunswick Street, Fitzroy as far as the eye can see.
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Original:  The 10th anniversary ride of Critical Mass' Melbourne branch saw a reported 1400 cyclists of kids, men and women alike take part.
Revised:  The 10th anniversary ride of the Melbourne branch of Critical Mass saw a reported 1400 cyclists of kids, men and women alike take part.
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Original:  The 10th anniversary ride of Critical Mass' Melbourne branch saw a reported 1400 cyclists of kids, men and women alike take part.
Revised:  The 10th anniversary ride of Critical Mass' Melbourne branch saw a reported 1400 cyclists take part.
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Original:  They crowded Brunswick Street, Fitzroy as far as the eye can see.
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Original:  The group has a anarchistic origin and structure so it makes it hard to pinpoint its messages but it does have one consensus message "We aren't blocking traffic;
Revised:  The group has an anarchistic origin and structure so it makes it hard to pinpoint its messages but it does have one consensus message "We aren't blocking traffic;
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Original:  The group has a anarchistic origin and structure so it makes it hard to pinpoint its messages but it does have one consensus message "We aren't blocking traffic;
Revised:  The group has a anarchistic origin and structure , which makes it hard to pinpoint its messages but it does have one consensus message "We aren't blocking traffic;
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Original:  The group has a anarchistic origin and structure so it makes it hard to pinpoint its messages but it does have one consensus message "We aren't blocking traffic;
Revised:  The group has a anarchistic origin and structure so it makes it hard to pinpoint its messages . However, it does have one consensus message "We aren't blocking traffic;
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Original:  The group has a anarchistic origin and structure so it makes it hard to pinpoint its messages but it does have one consensus message "We aren't blocking traffic;
Revised:  The group has a anarchistic origin and structure so it makes it hard to pinpoint its messages but it does have one central message: "We aren't blocking traffic;
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Original:  Stephen Dennis Acting police Super intendent said the riders were well behaved.
Revised:  Stonnington and Yarra's acting police superintendent, Stephen Dennis, said the riders were well behaved.
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Original:  Although the street action didnt go with out its threats from other members of the public.
Revised:  Although the street action didn't go without its threats from other members of the public.
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Original:  "If any one of those idiots illegally impedes me I'll run straight over them," said Truck driver Ross Thornton  speaking for Critical Smash
Revised:  "If any one of those idiots illegally impedes me I'll run straight over them," said Truck driver Ross Thornton , speaking for Critical Smash
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Original: On November 24, 2004 at 0.00 GMT, a new Licensing Law (License Act 2003) concerning opening hours of English pubs, clubs or shops selling alcohol have come into play , allowing around 60,000 establishments in England and Wales to extend their opening hours beyond the 23.00 limit in vigor until then, and dating back to the First World War.
Revised: On November 24, a new licensing law concerning the opening hours of English pubs, clubs or shops selling alcohol have come into play , allowing around 60,000 establishments in England and Wales to extend their opening hours beyond the 23.00 limit in vigor until then, and dating back to the First World War.
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Original: On November 24, 2004 at 0.00 GMT, a new Licensing Law (License Act 2003) concerning opening hours of English pubs, clubs or shops selling alcohol have come into play , allowing around 60,000 establishments in England and Wales to extend their opening hours beyond the 23.00 limit in vigor until then, and dating back to the First World War.
Revised: On November 24, 2004 at 0.00 GMT, a new Licensing Law (License Act 2003) concerning opening hours of English pubs, clubs or shops selling alcohol came into effect , allowing around 60,000 establishments in England and Wales to extend their opening hours beyond the 23.00 limit in vigor until then, and dating back to the First World War.
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Original: On November 24, 2004 at 0.00 GMT, a new Licensing Law (License Act 2003) concerning opening hours of English pubs, clubs or shops selling alcohol have come into play , allowing around 60,000 establishments in England and Wales to extend their opening hours beyond the 23.00 limit in vigor until then, and dating back to the First World War.
Revised: On November 24, 2004 at 0.00 GMT, a new Licensing Law (License Act 2003) concerning opening hours of English pubs, clubs or shops selling alcohol have come into play , allowing around 60,000 establishments in England and Wales to extend their opening hours beyond the 23.00 limit in force until then, and dating back to the First World War.
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Original:  About 1000 premices ( among which 359  pubs or clubs ) have applied and been granted a round the clock authorization, allowing them to stay open for 24 hours.
Revised:  About 1000 premises, among which 359 pubs or clubs ) have applied and been granted a round the clock authorization, allowing them to stay open for 24 hours.
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Original:  About 1000 premices ( among which 359  pubs or clubs ) have applied and been granted a round the clock authorization, allowing them to stay open for 24 hours.
Revised:  About 1000 premices ( among which 359 are pubs or clubs ) have applied and been granted a round the clock authorization, allowing them to stay open for 24 hours.
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Original:  About 1000 premices ( among which 359  pubs or clubs ) have applied and been granted a round the clock authorization, allowing them to stay open for 24 hours.
Revised:  About 1000 premices ( among which 359 pubs or clubs , have applied and been granted a round the clock authorization, allowing them to stay open for 24 hours.
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Original:  Tessa Jowell, Secretary of State for Culture, Media and Sport, has expressed her hope that this extension in opening times will lower the crave for massive drinking, prompted by the early closing of establishments.
Revised:  Tessa Jowell, Secretary of State for Culture, Media and Sport, expressed hope that this extension in opening times will lower the crave for massive drinking, prompted by the early closing of establishments.
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Original: Smoke still coming from the roof of Marconi House at about 2.30pm local time, over 3 hours after the alert was raised  A fire on , in central London, England, has led to serious traffic problems in the area since this morning.
Revised: Smoke still coming from the roof of Marconi House at about 2.30pm local time, over 3 hours after the alert was raised . A fire on , in central London, England, has led to serious traffic problems in the area since this morning.
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Original: Smoke still coming from the roof of Marconi House at about 2.30 pm local time, over 3 hours after the alert was raised.
Revised: Smoke still coming from the roof of Marconi House at about 2.30 p.m. local time, over 3 hours after the alert was raised.
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Original:  Smoke as seen from Waterloo Bridge The cause of the fire is unknown at present, but is located in the roof of the building.
Revised:  The cause of the fire is unknown at present, but is located in the roof of the building.
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Original:  The smoke could be seen from large parts of central London, and was still coming from the roof some hours after it started  
Revised:  The smoke could be seen from large parts of central London, and was still coming from the roof some hours after it started . 
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Original:  Ambulances, including hazardous response teams, and police officers are also in attendance.
Revised:  Ambulances, including hazardous response teams, and 
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Original:  The alert was raised at about 11 a.m. (10 a.m. ). About 75 firefighers in 15 fire engines were sent to the scene, from depots including and in east London and in south-east London.
Revised:  The alert was raised at about 11 a.m. (10 a.m. ). About 75 firefighters in 15 fire engines were sent to the scene, from depots including and in east London and in south-east London.
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Original:  Abal's adopted son, Teo was arrested on Wednesday after a two day search, he was the last person to be seen with the woma 
Revised:  Abal's adopted son, Teo was arrested on Wednesday after a two day search, he was the last person to be seen with the woman. 
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Original:  All family members living with me are immediate suspects and are subject to investigation and questioning by police  
Revised:  All family members living with me are immediate suspects and are subject to investigation and questioning by police ." 
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Original: 220px|The woman body was found at the leader's home in Port Moresby A body of a dead woman has been found  at the home of Sam Abal, the acting prime minister of Papua New Guinea.
Revised: 220px|The woman body was found at the leader's home in Port Moresby A woman has been found at the home of Sam Abal, the acting prime minister of Papua New Guinea.
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