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Original:  Lourey said . “As Iraqis stand up, we will stand down,” President Bush said on August 11th.
Revised:  Lourey said “As Iraqis stand up, we will stand down,” President Bush said on August 11th.
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Original: Vandelized memorial at Camp CaseyNot all Americans agree with Mrs.
Revised: Vandalized memorial at Camp CaseyNot all Americans agree with Mrs.
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Original:  Lourey said  
Revised:  Lourey said . 
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Original:  President Bush indicated that leaving Iraq now wouldn't be helpful for Iraqis or Americans, but only for terrorists
Revised:  President Bush claims that leaving Iraq now wouldn't be helpful for Iraqis or Americans, but only for terrorists
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Original:  The price at the New York Mercantile Exchange is now averaging over US$65 per barrel, a full $20 / barrel higher than one year ago.
Revised:  The price at the New York Mercantile Exchange is now averaging over US$65 per barrel, a full $20 a barrel higher than one year ago.
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Original:  The 2 blocks closer have already been demolished in March to make room for the archaeological project.
Revised:  The two blocks closer were demolished in March to make room for the archaeological project.
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Original:  The walls are confirmed as parts of the Ruins of St. Paul as it does matches the maps of it dated back to 1760, 1886,  1912.
Revised:  The walls are confirmed as parts of the Ruins of St. Paul as it does match the maps of it dated back to 1760, 1886, 1912.
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Original:  The walls are confirmed as parts of the Ruins of St. Paul as it does matches the maps of it dated back to 1760, 1886,  1912.
Revised:  The walls are confirmed as parts of the Ruins of St. Paul as it does matches the maps of it dated back to 1760, 1886, and 1912.
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Original:  The remaining 2 buildings will be demolished next week for further investigation
Revised:  The remaining two buildings will be demolished next week for further investigation
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Original:  Leaflets baring the Islamic group’s message were found near many of the homemade bombs.
Revised:  Leaflets bearing the Islamic group’s message were found near many of the homemade bombs.
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Original:  The group wants to establish an Islamic state which would be governed by secular laws.
Revised:  The group wants to establish an Islamic state in place of current secular laws.
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Original: The terrorist attacks have been attributed to the Jamaat-ul-Mujahideen group.
Revised: The attacks are being blamed on the Jamaat-ul-Mujahideen group.
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Original:  The group wants to establish an Islamic state in place of current secular laws.
Revised:  The group is said to want to establish an Islamic state in place of current secular laws.
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Original:  The bombs were  made to cause limited damage.
Revised:  The bombs were apparently made to cause limited damage.
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Original:  Explosives created for high collateral damage would  contain nails or other items that could be used as shrapnel.
Revised:  Explosives created for high collateral damage would typically contain nails or other items that could be used as shrapnel.
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Original:  795 kilometers at the southwest of Bangkok, Thailand and 2580 kilometers at the southeast of New Delhi, India  
Revised:  795 kilometers at the southwest of Bangkok, Thailand and 2580 kilometers at the southeast of New Delhi, India . 
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Original:  A 6.4 moment magnitude earthquake has hit  Andaman Islands, Bay of the Bengal, India, on Tuesday at 1:21:48 AM local time (Monday 19:51:48 UTC), USGS has reported.
Revised:  A 6.4 moment magnitude earthquake has hit near the Andaman Islands, Bay of the Bengal, India, on Tuesday at 1:21:48 AM local time (Monday 19:51:48 UTC), USGS has reported.
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Original:  The epicenter was located 120 kilometers at the southeast of Port Blair, Andaman Islands;
Revised:  The epicenter was located 120 kilometers southeast of Port Blair, Andaman Islands;
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Original:  350 kilometers at the north of Mohean, Nicobar Islands;
Revised:  350 kilometers north of Mohean, Nicobar Islands;
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Original:  795 kilometers at the southwest of Bangkok, Thailand and 2580 kilometers at the southeast of New Delhi, India.
Revised:  795 kilometers southwest of Bangkok, Thailand and 2580 kilometers at the southeast of New Delhi, India.
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Original:  795 kilometers at the southwest of Bangkok, Thailand and 2580 kilometers at the southeast of New Delhi, India.
Revised:  795 kilometers at the southwest of Bangkok, Thailand and 2580 kilometers southeast of New Delhi, India.
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Original:  No casualties or damage has been reported.
Revised:  No casualties or damage have been reported.
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Original:   Pacific Tsunami Warning Center in Hawaii said there was a "very small possibility of a local tsunami near the centre" but no possibility of a destructive, widespread tsunami
Revised:  The Pacific Tsunami Warning Center in Hawaii said there was a "very small possibility of a local tsunami near the centre" but no possibility of a destructive, widespread tsunami
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Original:  795 kilometers southwest of Bangkok , Thailand and 2580 kilometers southeast of New Delhi , India.
Revised:  795 kilometers southwest of , Thailand and 2580 kilometers southeast of New Delhi , India.
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Original:  795 kilometers southwest of Bangkok , Thailand and 2580 kilometers southeast of New Delhi , India.
Revised:  795 kilometers southwest of Bangkok , Thailand and 2580 kilometers southeast of , India.
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Original: The Chicago Blackhawks scored two goals just 28 seconds apart late in the second period to take a 2–0 series lead over the Philadelphia Flyers in Game 2 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Saturday night in Chicago  . [[file:Ben Eager.
Revised: In ice hockey, the Chicago Blackhawks scored two goals just 28 seconds apart late in the second period to take a 2–0 series lead over the Philadelphia Flyers in Game 2 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Saturday night in Chicago . [[file:Ben Eager.
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Original: The Chicago Blackhawks scored two goals just 28 seconds apart late in the second period to take a 2–0 series lead over the Philadelphia Flyers in Game 2 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Saturday night in Chicago  . [[file:Ben Eager.
Revised: The Chicago Blackhawks scored two goals just 28 seconds apart late in the second period to take a 2–0 series lead over the Philadelphia Flyers in Game 2 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Saturday night in Chicago , United States . [[file:Ben Eager.
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Original:  a 2005 agreement put the Palestinian and Israel in charge of the border, with observation from the European Union.
Revised:  a 2005 agreement put Palestine and Israel in charge of the border, with observation from the European Union.
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Original: A robotic system at Stanford medical center was used to perform a laparoscopic gastric bypass surgery succesfully with a similiar rate of complication seen in a normal operation.
Revised: A robotic system at Stanford Medical Center was used to perform a laparoscopic gastric bypass surgery succesfully with a similiar rate of complication seen in a normal operation.
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Original:  This leads the way for the use of robotic surgery in even more delicate procedures  such as heart surgery.
Revised:  This leads the way for the use of robotic surgery in even more delicate procedures , such as heart surgery.
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Original:  This is not a fully automated system however , as a human doctor must still control the operation via remote control  
Revised:  Note that this is not a fully automated system however , as a human doctor must still control the operation via remote control 
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Original:  This is not a fully automated system however , as a human doctor must still control the operation via remote control  
Revised:  This is not a fully automated system , as a human doctor must still control the operation via remote control 
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Original:  This is not a fully automated system however , as a human doctor must still control the operation via remote control  
Revised:  This is not a fully automated system however , as a human doctor controls the operation via remote control 
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Original: The mayor of Moscow Yuri Luzhkov attended the opening ceremony and symbolically handed over the keys to the buildings to the school directors.
Revised: The mayor of Moscow , Yuri Luzhkov, attended the opening ceremony and symbolically handed over the keys to the buildings to the school directors.
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Original:  Beslan's School Number One was seized by terrorist in September 2004.
Revised:  Beslan's School Number One was seized by terrorists in September 2004.
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Original:  The MV Rachel Corrie, an Irish aid ship, was seized by the Israeli Naval Forces .
Revised:  The Rachel Corrie, an Irish aid ship, was seized by the Israeli Naval Forces .
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Original:  The the 1,200-ton MV Rachel Corrie, an Irish aid ship, was seized by the Israeli Naval Forces, as it attempted to challenge the blockade of Gaza.
Revised:  The 1,200-ton MV Rachel Corrie, an Irish aid ship, was seized by the Israeli Naval Forces, as it attempted to challenge the blockade of Gaza.
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Original: In the run-up to the new Iraqi mandate the Interim Government has tried to suppress details of the growing number of civilian casualties, but the truth emerged after British veteran journalist Robert Fisk paid a visit to the morgue and was shown the human cost of Iraq's security crisis .
Revised: In the run-up to the new Iraqi mandate the Interim Government has tried to suppress details of the growing number of civilian casualties, but the truth emerged after British veteran journalist Robert Fisk paid a visit to the morgue and was shown the human cost of Iraq's security crisis 
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Original:  Unidentified bodies must be buried within days for lack of space — but the municipality is so overwhelmed by the number of killings that it can no longer provide the vehicles and personnel to take the remains to cemeteries     
Revised:  Unidentified bodies must be buried within days for lack of space — but the municipality is so overwhelmed by the number of killings that it can no longer provide the vehicles and personnel to take the remains to cemeteries . 
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Original:  This is not the first time the two have met: Stosur beat Schiavone in the opening round of last year's French Open, and again in Osaka later that year.
Revised:  However, this is not the first time the two have met: Stosur beat Schiavone in the opening round of last year's French Open, and again in Osaka later that year.
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Original:  None of the top three women  , including sisters Venus and Serena Williams, made it to the semifinals.
Revised:  None of the top three women in the event , including sisters Venus and Serena Williams, made it to the semifinals.
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Original:  In another major upset , this time for the men  , Robin Soderling defeated fellow Swedish player Roger Federer in a quarterfinal match of the French Open Tuesday, ending Federer's streak of 23 consecutive Grand Slam semifinals .
Revised:  In a major upset for the men , Robin Soderling defeated fellow Swedish player Roger Federer in a quarterfinal match of the French Open Tuesday, ending Federer's streak of 23 consecutive Grand Slam semifinals .
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Original:  In another major upset , this time for the men  , Robin Soderling defeated fellow Swedish player Roger Federer in a quarterfinal match of the French Open Tuesday, ending Federer's streak of 23 consecutive Grand Slam semifinals .
Revised:  In another major upset , this time for the men 's title , Robin Soderling defeated fellow Swedish player Roger Federer in a quarterfinal match of the French Open Tuesday, ending Federer's streak of 23 consecutive Grand Slam semifinals .
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Original:  In another major upset , this time for the men  , Robin Soderling defeated fellow Swedish player Roger Federer in a quarterfinal match of the French Open Tuesday, ending Federer's streak of 23 consecutive Grand Slam semifinals .
Revised:  In another major upset , this time for the men , Robin Soderling defeated fellow Swedish player Roger Federer in a quarterfinal match of the French Open Tuesday, ending Federer's streak of 23 consecutive Grand Slam semifinal appearances .
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Original:  Currently , the 24-year-old Nadal is set against Austria's Jurgen Melzer in the semifinals, while Soderling must still overcome the Czech Tomas Berdych in order to have a chance of defeating Nadal again this year
Revised:  Currently , the 24-year-old Nadal beat Austria's Jurgen Melzer in the semifinals, while Soderling must still overcome the Czech Tomas Berdych in order to have a chance of defeating Nadal again this year
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Original:  Currently , the 24-year-old Nadal is set against Austria's Jurgen Melzer in the semifinals, while Soderling must still overcome the Czech Tomas Berdych in order to have a chance of defeating Nadal again this year
Revised:  Currently , the 24-year-old Nadal is set against Austria's Jurgen Melzer , and Soderling defeated Czech player Tomas Berdych. If Nadal beats Soderling in this Sunday's final round, it will be his fifth French Open title
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Original:  Federer could also lose his status as number one in the world to Spanish rival Rafael Nadal if Nadal wins this year's French Open.
Revised:  Federer could also lose his status as number one in the world to rival Rafael Nadal if Nadal wins this year's French Open.
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Original: In a major upset for the men's title, Robin Soderling defeated fellow Swedish player Roger Federer in a quarterfinal match of the French Open Tuesday, ending Federer's streak of 23 consecutive Grand Slam semifinal appearances.
Revised: In a major upset for the men's title, Robin Soderling defeated Swiss player Roger Federer in a quarterfinal match of the French Open Tuesday, ending Federer's streak of 23 consecutive Grand Slam semifinal appearances.
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Original: left Hewlett-Packard (HP) expects to lose 9,000 jobs between now and 2013 in a US $1 billion (£686 million) restructuring plan.
Revised: left Hewlett-Packard (HP) expects lose 9,000 jobs between now and 2013 in a US $1 billion (£686 million) restructuring plan.
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Original:  Hewlett-Packard has about 300,000 employees and is the world's largest technology company by sales.
Revised:  Hewlett-Packard has around 300,000 employees and is the world's largest technology company by sales.
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Original:  HP is an American multinational information technology corporation headquartered in Palo Alto , California
Revised:  HP is an American multinational information technology corporation headquartered in , California
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Original: In a 5–4 decision on Tuesday, the US Supreme Court has ruled that once a suspect of a criminal investigation is informed of his right to remain silent, he must specifically invoke that right if he does not want his words to be used against him.
Revised: In a 5–4 decision on Tuesday, the US Supreme Court ruled that once a suspect of a criminal investigation is informed of his right to remain silent, he must specifically invoke that right if he does not want his words to be used against him.
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Original:  The case involved a 2000 fatal shooting in  Michigan committed by Van Chester Thompkins.
Revised:  The case involved a fatal shooting in Michigan committed by Van Chester Thompkins.
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Original:  The case involved a 2000 fatal shooting in  Michigan committed by Van Chester Thompkins.
Revised:  The case involved a 2000 fatal shooting in 2000 in Michigan committed by Van Chester Thompkins.
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Original:  When he was being interrogated , he was informed of his rights, including the right to remain silent or to consult an attorney, but Thompkins did not tell the officer he wished to invoke those rights.
Revised:  Before questioning , he was informed of his rights, including the right to remain silent or to consult an attorney, but Thompkins did not tell the officer he wished to invoke those rights.
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Original:  When he was being interrogated , he was informed of his rights, including the right to remain silent or to consult an attorney, but Thompkins did not tell the officer he wished to invoke those rights.
Revised:  When he was being interrogated , he was informed of his rights, including the right to remain silent and the right to consult an attorney, but Thompkins did not tell the officer he wished to invoke those rights.
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Original:  In the case, designated Berghuis v. Thompkins, the high court's conservative majority observed that since he was already informed of his rights, the defedant waived those rights when he voluntarily made an incriminating statement during interrogation.
Revised:  In the case, designated Berghuis v. Thompkins, the high court's conservative majority observed that since he was already informed of his rights, the defendant waived those rights when he voluntarily made an incriminating statement during interrogation.
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Original:   The details of the raid are still remain unclear and repatriated flotilla activists have challenged the Israeli version of deadly Gaza flotilla raid.
Revised:  The details of the raid are still remain unclear and repatriated flotilla activists have challenged the Israeli version of deadly Gaza flotilla raid. The details of the raid are still remain unclear and repatriated flotilla activists have challenged the Israeli version of deadly Gaza flotilla raid.
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Original:   The details of the raid are still remain unclear and repatriated flotilla activists have challenged the Israeli version of deadly Gaza flotilla raid.
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Original: All International Activists from the six ship " Gaza Freedom flotilla ", seized in the Gaza flotilla raid by Israeli naval forces in international waters, may be released.
Revised: All International Activists from the six ship " ", seized in the Gaza flotilla raid by Israeli naval forces in international waters, may be released.
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Original: All International Activists from the six ship " Gaza Freedom flotilla ", seized in the Gaza flotilla raid by Israeli naval forces in international waters, may be released.
Revised: All International Activists from the six ship " Gaza Freedom flotilla ", seized in the by in international waters, may be released.
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Original:  The activists had attempted to break the Israeli blockade of Gaza .
Revised:  The activists had attempted to break the Israeli .
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Original:  The details of the raid still remain unclear and repatriated flotilla activists have challenged the Israeli version of the deadly raid .
Revised:  The details of the raid still remain unclear and repatriated flotilla activists have challenged the Israeli version of the .
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Original: Jetstar Airways  a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline  has announced plans to trial Apple iPads as an in-flight entertainment option.
Revised: Jetstar Airways , a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline has announced plans to trial Apple iPads as an in-flight entertainment option.
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Original: Jetstar Airways  a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline  has announced plans to trial Apple iPads as an in-flight entertainment option.
Revised: Jetstar Airways a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline , has announced plans to trial Apple iPads as an in-flight entertainment option.
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Original:  Starting later this month, Jetstar plans to offer passengers the option to rent iPads for $10AU on domestic flights longer than an hour during a two-week trial .
Revised:  Starting later this month, Jetstar plans to begin a two-week trial during which passengers will have the option to rent iPads for $10AU on domestic flights longer than an hour during a two-week trial .
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Original:  Starting later this month, Jetstar plans to offer passengers the option to rent iPads for $10AU on domestic flights longer than an hour during a two-week trial .
Revised:  Starting later this month, Jetstar plans to offer passengers the option to rent iPads for $10AU on domestic flights longer than an hour .
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Original:  The iPads will be specially customized by Bluebox Avionics, who at present are the only company to offer iPads as part of an in-flight entertainment system.
Revised:  The iPads will be specially customized by Bluebox Avionics, who at present is the only company to offer iPads as part of an in-flight entertainment system.
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Original:  Jetstar will be the first to offer the Bluebox Avionics customized systems, though  Bluebox Avionics has said the system will be available to other airlines soon.
Revised:  Jetstar will be the first to offer the Bluebox Avionics customized systems, though , Bluebox Avionics has said the system will be available to other airlines soon.
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Original: Starting later this month, Jetstar plans to begin a two-week trial  during which passengers will have the option to rent iPads for $10AU on domestic flights longer than an hour.
Revised: Starting later this month, Jetstar plans to begin a two-week trial , during which passengers will have the option to rent iPads for $10AU on domestic flights longer than an hour.
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Original:  Internet browsing however will be disabled as per Jetstar's policy on internet connected devices, said spokeswoman Andrea Wait.
Revised:  Internet access however will be disabled as per Jetstar's policy on internet connected devices, said spokeswoman Andrea Wait.
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Original:  The iPads  will be specially customized by Bluebox Avionics  , who at present is the only company to offer iPads as part of an in-flight entertainment system.
Revised:  The iPads will be specially customized by Bluebox Avionics , is the only company to offer iPads as part of an in-flight entertainment system.
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Original:   Jetstar chief executive Bruce Buchanan said he expected the iPads to be very popular during the trial.
Revised:  Depending on the results of the trial, iPads may replace existing Jetstar in-flight entertainment systems. Jetstar chief executive Bruce Buchanan said he expected the iPads to be very popular during the trial.
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Original:  If the trial is successful, he said the airline would “be looking to roll out the devices across our entire domestic and international network later in the year .
Revised:  If the trial is successful, the airline would “be looking to roll out the devices across our entire domestic and international network later in the year .
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Original:  If the trial is successful, he said the airline would “be looking to roll out the devices across our entire domestic and international network later in the year .
Revised:  If the trial is successful, he said the airline would “be looking to roll out the devices across our entire domestic and international network later in the year ", said Buchanan
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Original:  If the trial is successful, the airline would “be looking to roll out the devices across our entire domestic and international network later in the year", said Buchanan
Revised:  If the trial is successful, the airline would “be looking to roll out the devices across our entire domestic and international network later in the year", said Buchana
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