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Original:  Perhaps the most controversial part of the phone-in was the statement, "Nobody can bring me back to Thailand, except royal kindness of HM the King or the power of the people," this can be construed as an appeal for a royal pardon, or for his supporters to be more vocal.
Revised:  During the phone-in was the statement, "Nobody can bring me back to Thailand, except royal kindness of HM the King or the power of the people," this can be construed as an appeal for a royal pardon, or for his supporters to be more vocal.
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Original:  Perhaps the most controversial part of the phone-in was the statement, "Nobody can bring me back to Thailand, except royal kindness of HM the King or the power of the people," this can be construed as an appeal for a royal pardon, or for his supporters to be more vocal.
Revised:  Perhaps the most controversial part of the phone-in Thaksin said: "Nobody can bring me back to Thailand, except royal kindness of HM the King or the power of the people," this can be construed as an appeal for a royal pardon, or for his supporters to be more vocal.
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Original: Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 An email circulated to airlines yesterday revealed that the UK government has revoked the visas of Thai ex-Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra and his wife.
Revised:  An email circulated to airlines yesterday revealed that the UK government has revoked the visas of Thai ex-Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra and his wife.
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Original: An email circulated to airlines yesterday  revealed that the UK government has revoked the visas of Thai ex-Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra and his wife.
Revised: An email circulated to airlines yesterday , revealed that the UK government has revoked the visas of Thai ex-Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra and his wife.
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Original: An email circulated to airlines yesterday, revealed that the UK government has revoked the visas of Thai ex-Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra and his wife.
Revised: An email circulated the airlines yesterday, revealed that the UK government has revoked the visas of Thai ex-Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra and his wife.
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Original:  An email circulated the airlines yesterday, revealed that the UK government has revoked the visas of Thai ex-Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra and his wife.
Revised:  An email circulated to airlines yesterday, revealed that the UK government has revoked the visas of Thai ex-Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra and his wife.
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Original:  Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 Thaksin and his wife, Potjaman Shinawatra, have spent much of the past two years living in exile in the UK after jumping bail on charges against them in Thailand.
Revised:  Thaksin and his wife, Potjaman Shinawatra, have spent much of the past two years living in exile in the UK after jumping bail on charges against them in Thailand.
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Original:  Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 Thaksin and his wife, Potjaman Shinawatra, have spent much of the past two years living in exile in the UK after jumping bail on charges against them in Thailand.
Revised:  Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 Thaksin and his wife, Potjaman Shinawatra, have spent much of the past two years living in exile in the UK after jumping bail on charges against them in Thailand.
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Original:  Despite his self-imposed exile, the ex-PM who was deposed by a bloodless coup in 2006 has remained in the news and public consciousness in Thailand, through several high-profile court cases alleging corruption and malfeasance during his time as premier and leader of the now-banned Thai Rak Thai (lit: Thais love Thais) political party  .
Revised:  Despite his self-imposed exile, the ex-PM who was deposed by a bloodless coup in 2006 has remained in the news and public consciousness in Thailand, several high-profile court cases alleging corruption and malfeasance during his time as premier and leader of the now-banned Thai Rak Thai (lit: Thais love Thais) political party .
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Original:  Despite his self-imposed exile, the ex-PM who was deposed by a bloodless coup in 2006 has remained in the news and public consciousness in Thailand, through several high-profile court cases alleging corruption and malfeasance during his time as premier and leader of the now-banned Thai Rak Thai (lit: Thais love Thais) political party  .
Revised:  Despite his self-imposed exile, the ex-PM who was deposed by a bloodless coup in 2006 has remained in the news and public consciousness in Thailand, through several high-profile court cases alleging corruption and malfeasance during his time as premier and leader of the now-banned Thai Rak Thai (lit: Thais love Thais) political party remain outstanding .
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Original:  During the phone-in Thaksin said: "Nobody can bring me back to Thailand, except royal kindness of HM the King or the power of the people . " This can be construed as an appeal for a royal pardon, or for his supporters to be more vocal.
Revised:  During the phone-in Thaksin said: "Nobody can bring me back to Thailand, except royal kindness of HM the King or the power of the people , " This can be construed as an appeal for a royal pardon, or for his supporters to be more vocal.
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Original:  During the phone-in Thaksin said: "Nobody can bring me back to Thailand, except royal kindness of HM the King or the power of the people . " This can be construed as an appeal for a royal pardon, or for his supporters to be more vocal.
Revised:  During the phone-in Thaksin said: "Nobody can bring me back to Thailand, except royal kindness of HM the King or the power of the people . " this can be construed as an appeal for a royal pardon, or for his supporters to be more vocal.
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Original:  In an email to Wikinews the UK Home Office declined to comment on the extradition, specifying it was not policy to discuss individual cases.
Revised:  In an email to Wikinews the UK Home Office declined to comment on the extradition, specifying it was policy not to discuss individual cases.
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Original: Last Saturday, he gave a telephone address to pro-government protesters rallying at the country's national stadium in Bangkok.
Revised: Last Saturday, he gave a telephone number to pro-government protesters rallying at the country's national stadium in Bangkok.
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Original:  The lunar orbit insertion (LOI) began at 4:50 p.M . And lasted for 817 seconds (14 minutes).
Revised:  The lunar orbit insertion (LOI) began at 4:50 P.M and lasted for 817 seconds (14 minutes).
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Original:   This was considered to be a most critical moment of the entire mission and scientists at ISRO took a sigh or relief post the success of LOI.
Revised:  This was considered to be a most critical moment of the entire mission 
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Original:  With this, India becomes the fifth country to send a spacecraft to Moon .
Revised:  With this, India becomes the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the moon .
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Original:  The other countries, which have sent spacecraft to Moon, are the United States,  former Soviet Union, Japan and China.
Revised:  The other countries, which have sent spacecraft to Moon, are the United States, the former Soviet Union, Japan and China.
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Original:  The satellite has now been placed in a 7,502 km X 500 km elliptical orbit around the moon . Chandrayaan will be  lowered to a circular orbit at a distance of 100 km from lunar surface gradually.
Revised:  The satellite has now been placed in a 7,502 km X 500 km elliptical orbit around the Moon . Chandrayaan will be lowered to a circular orbit at a distance of 100 km from lunar surface gradually.
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Original:  The satellite has now been placed in a 7,502 km X 500 km elliptical orbit around the moon . Chandrayaan will be  lowered to a circular orbit at a distance of 100 km from lunar surface gradually.
Revised:  The satellite has now been placed in a 7,502 km X 500 km elliptical orbit around the moon . Chandrayaan will be gradually lowered to a circular orbit at a distance of 100 km from lunar surface gradually.
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Original: Diagram of the Chandrayaan-1 orbiter India's first lunar mission Chandrayaan-1 (meaning 'moon craft' in Sanskrit) has passed the tricky manoeuvre of entering the lunar orbit at 5:15 PM Indian standard time.
Revised: Diagram of the Chandrayaan-1 orbiter India's first lunar mission Chandrayaan-1 (meaning 'moon craft' in Sanskrit) has completed the tricky manoeuvre of entering the lunar orbit at 5:15 PM Indian standard time.
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Original:  This was an important milestone for the Indian mission to moon which was launched on October 22 from Indian spaceport Satish Dhawan Space Center at Sriharikota.
Revised:  This was an important milestone for the Indian mission to the Moon, which was launched on October 22 from Indian spaceport Satish Dhawan Space Center at Sriharikota.
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Original:  Chandrayaan will be gradually lowered to a circular orbit at a distance of 100 km from  lunar surface.
Revised:  Chandrayaan will be gradually lowered to a circular orbit at a distance of 100 km from the lunar surface.
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Original:  Besides carrying three important scientific instruments, the lunar probe will also carry a picture of the indian national flag.
Revised:  Besides carrying three important scientific instruments, the lunar probe will also carry a picture of the Indian national flag.
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Original:  The other countries , which have sent spacecraft to Moon , are the United States, the former Soviet Union, Japan and China.
Revised:  The other countries which have sent spacecraft to Moon , are the United States, the former Soviet Union, Japan and China.
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Original:  The other countries , which have sent spacecraft to Moon , are the United States, the former Soviet Union, Japan and China.
Revised:  The other countries , which have sent spacecraft to Moon are the United States, the former Soviet Union, Japan and China.
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Original: With this, India becomes both the fourth country to place a flag on the moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the moon.
Revised: With this, India will become both the fourth country to place a flag on the moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the moon.
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Original:  The other countries which have sent spacecraft to  Moon are the United States, the former Soviet Union, Japan and China.
Revised:  The other countries which have sent spacecraft to the Moon are the United States, the former Soviet Union, Japan and China.
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Original:  Besides, the European Space Agency (ESA), a consortium of 17 countries , has also sent a spacecraft to moon .
Revised:  Besides, the European Space Agency (ESA), a consortium of 17 countries .
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Original: Hurricane Paloma on November 7 Hurricane Paloma, which the U.S. National Hurricane Center yesterday labeled as "extremely dangerous", has recently hit towards Cuba .
Revised: Hurricane Paloma on November 7 Hurricane Paloma, which the U.S. National Hurricane Center yesterday labeled as "extremely dangerous", has recently hit Cuba .
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Original:  Due to updated forecasts, it has also removed the waning for the province of Sancti Spiritus   .
Revised:  Due to updated forecasts, it has also removed the waning for the province of Sancti Spiritus . .
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Original:  The depression then became a tropical storm then a hurricane .
Revised:  The depression then became a tropical storm then a hurricane 
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Original:  All were rejected by Supreme Court judge
Revised:  All were rejected by the Supreme Court
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Original:  All three were convicted for the  2002 Bali bombings which killed 202 in the tourist district of Kuta on 12 October .
Revised:  All three were convicted for the 2002 Bali bombings which killed 202 in the tourist district of Kuta .
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Original: Memorial at the site of the bombing The three Islamic militants found guilty of the 2002 Bali bombing have been executed on the island of Nusakambangan.
Revised:  The three Islamic militants found guilty of the 2002 Bali bombing have been executed on the island of Nusakambangan.
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Original:  There have been rumours that the crash was deliberate as two prominent politicians, interior mimister Juan Camilo Mourino and leading anti-drug advisor Jose Luis Santiago Vasconcelos   
Revised:  There have been rumours that the crash was deliberate as two prominent politicians, interior mimister Juan Camilo Mourino and leading anti-drug advisor Jose Luis Santiago Vasconcelos . 
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Original:  It was travelling at 300 mph (500 kph) when it struck cars moving through the city  
Revised:  It was travelling at 300 mph (500 kph) when it struck cars moving through the city . 
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Original:  There have been rumours that the crash was deliberate as two prominent politicians, interior mimister Juan Camilo Mourino and leading anti-drug advisor Jose Luis Santiago Vasconcelos  .
Revised:  There have been rumours that the crash was deliberate as two prominent politicians, interior minister Juan Camilo Mourino and leading anti-drug advisor Jose Luis Santiago Vasconcelos .
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Original:  There have been rumours that the crash was deliberate as two prominent politicians, interior mimister Juan Camilo Mourino and leading anti-drug advisor Jose Luis Santiago Vasconcelos  .
Revised:  There have been rumours that the crash was deliberate as two prominent politicians, interior mimister Juan Camilo Mourino and leading anti-drug advisor Jose Luis Santiago Vasconcelos were aboard .
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Original:  The aircraft should have been headed East towards Mexico City International Airport, but was instead troveling roughly Northbound when the crash occurred.
Revised:  The aircraft should have been headed East towards Mexico City International Airport, but was instead travelling roughly Northbound when the crash occurred.
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Original: A file photo of a similar aircraft in the UK A bomb has been ruled out in the crash of a government-owned Learjet L45 in Mexico City, Mexico on Friday, killing all nine on board and five on the ground.
Revised: A bomb has been ruled out in the crash of a government-owned Learjet L45 in Mexico City, Mexico on Friday, killing all nine on board and five on the ground.
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Original:  The FSB spokesman did not say who might be responsobile for the attack on the train, which at the time was carrying more than 300 passenger
Revised:  The FSB spokesman did not say who might be responsobile for the attack on the train, which at the time was carrying more than 300 passengers
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Original: A Russian passenger train has been derailed by an explosion on Sunday, the FSB national security service has said in a statement.
Revised: A Russian passenger train has been derailed by an explosion on Sunday, the FSB has said in a statement.
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Original:  The FSB spokesman did not say who might be responsible for the attack on the train, which at the time was carrying more than 300 passengers
Revised:  The spokesman did not say who might be responsible for the attack on the train, which at the time was carrying more than 300 passengers
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Original:  The spokesman did not say who might be responsible for the attack on the train, which at the time was carrying more than 300 passengers  
Revised:  The spokesman did not say who might be responsible for the attack on the train, which at the time was carrying more than 300 passengers . 
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Original: A Russian passenger train has been derailed by an explosion on Sunday, the FSB has said in a statement.
Revised: A Russian has been derailed by an explosion on Sunday, the FSB has said in a statement.
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Original:  A FSB spokesman said 12 people have been injured, when two carriages of a train heading from the Chechen capital Grozny derailed 90 miles south of Moscow.
Revised:  A FSB spokesman said 12 people have been injured, when two carriages of a train heading from the Chechen capital derailed 90 miles south of Moscow.
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Original:  Only an hour prior to the incident, a train carying elementary school pupils from Beslan, North Ossetia on their way to Croatia passed on the same track.
Revised:  Only an hour prior to the incident, a train carrying elementary school pupils from Beslan, North Ossetia on their way to Croatia passed on the same track.
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Original:  Only an hour prior to the incident, a train carying elementary school pupils from Beslan, North Ossetia on their way to Croatia passed on the same track.
Revised:  Only an hour prior to the incident, a train carying elementary school pupils from , on their way to Croatia passed on the same track.
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Original:  56 children were heading to a Moscow airport, from where they flew to Zagreb .
Revised:  56 children were heading to a Moscow airport, from where they flew to .
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Original: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A way memorial in Corley today ]] To commemorate Remembrance Sunday, a day in which Britons killed in wars around the world, many events have taken place across the United Kingdom today  .
Revised: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A war memorial in Corley today ]] To commemorate Remembrance Sunday, a day in which Britons killed in wars around the world, many events have taken place across the United Kingdom today .
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Original:  Queen Elizabeth II led the main event to mark the occasion at the Cenotaph in London, with events also taking place in North Staffordshire, Coventry, Wales, Lytham, St Anne's, Northern Ireland and Birmingham, in addition to small local events across the country   
Revised:  Queen Elizabeth II led the main event to mark the occasion at the Cenotaph in London, with events also taking place in North Staffordshire, Coventry, Wales, Lytham, St Anne's, Northern Ireland and Birmingham, in addition to small local events across the country . 
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Original: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A war memorial in Corley today ]] To commemorate Remembrance Sunday, a day in which Britons killed in wars around the world are remembered , many events have taken place across the United Kingdom today and earlier this week, including many affiliated with the Poppy Appeal.
Revised: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A war memorial in Corley today ]] Today is Remembrance Sunday, a day in which Britons killed in wars around the world are remembered , many events have taken place across the United Kingdom today and earlier this week, including many affiliated with the Poppy Appeal.
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Original: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A war memorial in Corley today ]] To commemorate Remembrance Sunday, a day in which Britons killed in wars around the world are remembered , many events have taken place across the United Kingdom today and earlier this week, including many affiliated with the Poppy Appeal.
Revised: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A war memorial in Corley today ]] To commemorate Remembrance Sunday, an annual observance in which Britons killed in wars around the world are remembered , many events have taken place across the United Kingdom today and earlier this week, including many affiliated with the Poppy Appeal.
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Original: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A war memorial in Corley today ]] To commemorate Remembrance Sunday, a day in which Britons killed in wars around the world are remembered , many events have taken place across the United Kingdom today and earlier this week, including many affiliated with the Poppy Appeal.
Revised: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A war memorial in Corley today ]] To commemorate Remembrance Sunday, a day in which Britons killed in wars around the world are remembered . Many events have taken place across the United Kingdom today and earlier this week, including many affiliated with the Poppy Appeal.
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Original:  The Royal British Legion sent it's "Poppy Man" sculpture around Wales and Northern Island to draw attention to it's appeal, while in Lytham and St Anne's, the wife and daughter of the deceased comedian Les Dawson launched the appeal for funds.
Revised:  The Royal British Legion sent its "Poppy Man" sculpture around Wales and Northern Island to draw attention to it's appeal, while in Lytham and St Anne's, the wife and daughter of the deceased comedian Les Dawson launched the appeal for funds.
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Original: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A war memorial in Corley today ]] Today is Remembrance Sunday, an annual observance in which Britons killed in wars around the world are remembered .
Revised: Image:Remembrance Sunday 2008 - 3.jpg|A war memorial in Corley today ]] Today is Remembrance Sunday, an annual observance in which Britons killed in wars around the world .
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Original:  Protesters have claimed that the church as an institution made  cash donations to the Proposition 8 campaign (which would be illegal), though no evidence has yet surfaced concerning the claims .
Revised:  Protesters have claimed that the church as an institution made cash donations to the Proposition 8 campaign .
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Original: More than 1,000 protesters showed up to demonstrate in front of the Los Angeles temple of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints on Friday, November 7, to protest the church's involvement with the passing of Proposition 8, an amendment to the California constitution banning gay marriages (which were recently made legal by a court order).
Revised: More than 1,000 protesters showed up to demonstrate in front of the Los Angeles temple of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints on Friday, November 7, to protest the church's involvement with the passing of Proposition 8, an amendment to the California constitution to ban gay marriage, which was recently made legal by a court order).
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Original:   F. Damion Barela, who had obtained a homosexual marriage to his husband five months ago, said, "I'm disappointed in the Californians who voted for this."
Revised:  F. Damion Barela, who had obtained a gay marriage to his husband five months ago, said, "I'm disappointed in the Californians who voted for this."
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Original:  In particular, he was bothered that some ethnic groups supported the ban . "To them I say, 'Shame on you because you should know what this feels like , '" he added.
Revised:  In particular, he was bothered that some ethnic groups supported the ban : "To them I say, 'Shame on you because you should know what this feels like , '" he added.
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Original:  In particular, he was bothered that some ethnic groups supported the ban . "To them I say, 'Shame on you because you should know what this feels like , '" he added.
Revised:  In particular, he was bothered that some ethnic groups supported the ban . "To them I say, 'Shame on you because you should know what this feels like . '" he added.
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Original:  In particular, he was bothered that some ethnic groups supported the ban . "To them I say, 'Shame on you because you should know what this feels like , '" he added.
Revised:  In particular, he was bothered that some ethnic groups supported the ban . "To them I say, 'Shame on you because you should know what this feels like , '" 
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Original:  Several other churches have been vandalized by protesters since its passage   .
Revised:  Several other churches have been vandalized by protesters since its passage . .
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