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Original: ]] A Thai inferno greets the world and the Year of the earth Ox (牛) after a pyrotechnic display has started a blaze which rips through Santika, a three-story Bangkok nightclub, in Ekkamai Soi 9 (Sukhumvit 63), Ekkamai district, Thong Lor.
Revised: ]] A Thai inferno greets the world and the Year of the earth Ox (牛) after a pyrotechnic display has started a blaze which ripped through Santika, a three-story Bangkok nightclub, in Ekkamai Soi 9 (Sukhumvit 63), Ekkamai district, Thong Lor.
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Original:  Police Colonel Suphin Sapphuang has confirmed that at least 59 people are dead - 53 at the fire scene and six expired later in some hospitals.
Revised:  Police Colonel Suphin Sapphuang has confirmed that at least 59 people are dead - 53 at the fire scene and six later in various hospitals.
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Original:  At least 223 people  injured, including 29 foreigners , have been rushed to 19 Bangkok hospitals, including Ramkhamhaeng, Bangkok, Kluaynam Thai 2, Vipa-Ram hospitals, for emergency treatment.
Revised:  At least 223 people were injured, including 29 foreigners , have been rushed to 19 Bangkok hospitals, including Ramkhamhaeng, Bangkok, Kluaynam Thai 2, Vipa-Ram hospitals, for emergency treatment.
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Original:  At least 223 people  injured, including 29 foreigners , have been rushed to 19 Bangkok hospitals, including Ramkhamhaeng, Bangkok, Kluaynam Thai 2, Vipa-Ram hospitals, for emergency treatment.
Revised:  At least 223 people injured, including 29 foreigners ; all have been taken to Bangkok hospitals, including Ramkhamhaeng, Bangkok, Kluaynam Thai 2, Vipa-Ram hospitals, for emergency treatment.
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Original:  Media reports reveal most of the fatalities are Thais but foreign residents and international tourists are also among the fire victims of the “ Bad Boy Party ” . Teo Sze Siong, a Singaporean has died, while one of the Japanese, Wada Keiichi, 25, has 60 percent burns and is in a coma.
Revised:  Media reports reveal most of the fatalities are Thais but foreign residents and international tourists are also among the fire victims of the " Bad Boy Party ” . Teo Sze Siong, a Singaporean has died, while one of the Japanese, Wada Keiichi, 25, has 60 percent burns and is in a coma.
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Original:  Media reports reveal most of the fatalities are Thais but foreign residents and international tourists are also among the fire victims of the “ Bad Boy Party ” . Teo Sze Siong, a Singaporean has died, while one of the Japanese, Wada Keiichi, 25, has 60 percent burns and is in a coma.
Revised:  Media reports reveal most of the fatalities are Thais but foreign residents and international tourists are also among the fire victims of the “ Bad Boy Party " . Teo Sze Siong, a Singaporean has died, while one of the Japanese, Wada Keiichi, 25, has 60 percent burns and is in a coma.
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Original:  Firemen have put off the blaze after two hours, which started on the upper floor.
Revised:  Firemen have put out the blaze after two hours, which started on the upper floor.
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Original:  “ The fire spread very quickly because there was a lot of fuel in the club, like alcohol, foam and balloons, ” he added.
Revised:  " The fire spread very quickly because there was a lot of fuel in the club, like alcohol, foam and balloons, ” he added.
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Original:  “ The fire spread very quickly because there was a lot of fuel in the club, like alcohol, foam and balloons, ” he added.
Revised:  “ The fire spread very quickly because there was a lot of fuel in the club, like alcohol, foam and balloons, " he added.
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Original:  The Asian Tribune says 30 cadavers are "very difficult to idenfity".
Revised:  The Asian Tribune says 30 bodies are "very difficult to idenfity".
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Original:  Later, "39 bodies had been identified by Thursday afternoon — 38 Thais and one Singaporean," Police Major Akaluk Siriyodsophon says
Revised:  "39 bodies had been identified by Thursday afternoon — 38 Thais and one Singaporean," Police Major Akaluk Siriyodsophon says
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Original:  Later, "39 bodies had been identified by Thursday afternoon — 38 Thais and one Singaporean," Police Major Akaluk Siriyodsophon says
Revised:  Later, "39 bodies had been identified by Thursday afternoon — 38 Thais and one Singaporean," Police Major Akaluk Siriyodsophon said
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Original:  [[File:Bangkok_nighttime.jpg|Bangkok (Krung Thep Maha Nakhon, pronounced, krūŋtʰêːp máhǎːnákʰɔn, Th-Krung Thep Maha Nakhon.ogg , กรุงเทพมหานคร) nighttime.
Revised:  [[File:Bangkok_nighttime.jpg|Bangkok (Krung Thep Maha Nakhon, pronounced, krūŋtʰêːp máhǎːnákʰɔnlisten , กรุงเทพมหานคร) nighttime.
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Original:  Sukhumvit Soi 55), is a road in Watthana district, Bangkok, Thailand.
Revised:  Sukhumvit Soi 55), is a raod in Watthana district, Bangkok, Thailand.
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Original:  Jongrak Jutanont and media reports, the victims who suffered injuries include at least four Britons, including Steven Hall, a British national, two South Korean, one Singaporean, and four Japanese nationals, and citizens of France, Australia, Nepal, and the Netherlands.
Revised:  Jongrak Jutanont and media reports, the victims who suffered injuries include at least four Britons, including Steven Hall, a British national, two South Korean, one Singaporean, and four Japanese nationals, and citizens of France, Australia, Nepal, and Netherlands.
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Original:  Eighteen of the nineteen on board were killed when Yeti Airlines Flight 103 struck a rock at the side of the runway at Lukla Airport and caught fire   
Revised:  Eighteen of the nineteen on board were killed when Yeti Airlines Flight 103 struck a rock at the side of the runway at Lukla Airport and caught fire . 
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Original:  Investigators examined the crash site and interviewed eyewitnesses before producing the report, which has been submitted to the government  
Revised:  Investigators examined the crash site and interviewed eyewitnesses before producing the report, which has been submitted to the government . 
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Original:  The flight was from Katmandu and  attempting to land at Lukla, which is at an elevation of 9,200 feet (2,800 meters)  and has a sheer drop at the runway's end.
Revised:  The flight had departed from Katmandu and attempting to land at Lukla, which is at an elevation of 9,200 feet (2,800 meters) and has a sheer drop at the runway's end.
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Original:  The flight was from Katmandu and  attempting to land at Lukla, which is at an elevation of 9,200 feet (2,800 meters)  and has a sheer drop at the runway's end.
Revised:  The flight was from Katmandu and was attempting to land at Lukla, which is at an elevation of 9,200 feet (2,800 meters) and has a sheer drop at the runway's end.
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Original:  The flight was from Katmandu and  attempting to land at Lukla, which is at an elevation of 9,200 feet (2,800 meters)  and has a sheer drop at the runway's end.
Revised:  The flight was from Katmandu and attempting to land at Lukla, which is at an elevation of 9,200 feet (2,800 meters) , and has a sheer drop at the runway's end.
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Original: The only survivor of the crash was the aircraft's captain Rå¡Ð_§å¥ÑT€® . Twelve Germans, four Nepalis and two Australians were killed.
Revised: The only survivor of the crash was the aircraft's captain . Twelve Germans, four Nepalis and two Australians were killed.
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Original: Kent Hovind's Appeal for his and his wife, Jo's, 58 felony counts was recently denied by Eleventh Circuit Court.
Revised: Kent Hovind's Appeal for his and his wife, Jo's, felony convictions was recently denied by Eleventh Circuit Court.
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Original:  Kent and Jo were convicted of 58 and 44 tax-related felonies, respectively, including obstruction and intimidation of federal officers willful failure to collect and pay taxes, and structuring to avoid bank reporting requirements.
Revised:  Kent and Jo were convicted of 58 and 44 tax-related felonies, obstruction and intimidation of federal officers willful failure to collect and pay taxes, and structuring to avoid bank reporting requirements.
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Original:  Kent and Jo were convicted of 58 and 44 tax-related felonies  , obstruction and intimidation of federal officers willful failure to collect and pay taxes, and structuring to avoid bank reporting requirements.
Revised:  Kent and Jo were convicted of 58 and 44 tax-related felonies respectively , obstruction and intimidation of federal officers willful failure to collect and pay taxes, and structuring to avoid bank reporting requirements.
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Original:  Kent is a Pensacola young Earth creationist/Evangelist and operator of Dinosaur Adventure Land whose speaking engagements and merchandised earned US$5 million from 1999 to March 2004.
Revised:  Kent is a Pensacola young Earth creationist/Evangelist and operator of Dinosaur Adventure Land whose speaking engagements and merchandise earned US$5 million from 1999 to March 2004.
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Original:  Whereas, in June 2007 Jo was sentenced to one year and on day in prison, but the judge released her pending appeal.
Revised:  Whereas, in June 2007 Jo was sentenced to one year and one day in prison, but the judge released her pending appeal.
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Original:  According to air force spokesman Wing Commander Janaka Nanayakkara, the 37 injured were 16 airmen   .
Revised:  According to air force spokesman Wing Commander Janaka Nanayakkara, the 37 injured were 16 airmen . .
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Original:  The liberation of Kilinochchi, the rebel's administrative `capital` is a heavy blow to the LTTE's causes in years.
Revised:  The 
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Original:  The rebels' struggled since 1983 to establish an independent nation for the Tamils.
Revised:  rebels' struggled since 1983 to establish an independent nation for the Tamils.
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Original:  Government soldiers troops also advanced further to recapture the Elephant Pass which was seized by the Tamil Tigers in April 2000  killing hundreds of soldiers.
Revised:  Government soldiers troops also advanced further to recapture the Elephant Pass which was seized by the Tamil Tigers in April 2000 , killing hundreds of soldiers.
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Original:  The seige reportedly killed over two dozen Tamil rebels   .
Revised:  The siege reportedly killed over two dozen Tamil rebels .
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Original:  The seige reportedly killed over two dozen Tamil rebels   .
Revised:  The seige reportedly killed over two dozen Tamil rebels . .
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Original: Quarterback Mark Sanchez led the USC offense with 4 passing touchdowns and 413 passing yards, a career high and the second most in Rose Bowl history.
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Original:  92,293 fans watched the University of Southern California Trojans defeated the Penn State Nittany Lions by a score of 38-24 in the 95th annual Rose Bowl Game, which took place yesterday at the Rose Bowl Stadium in Pasadena.
Revised:  92,293 fans watched the University of Southern California Trojans defeat the Penn State Nittany Lions by a score of 38-24 in the 95th annual Rose Bowl Game, which took place yesterday at the Rose Bowl Stadium in Pasadena.
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Original:  USC's win finished the season with a record of 12-1 due to an upset loss to the Oregon State Beavers  on September 25.
Revised:  The Trojans compiled a record of 12-1 due to an upset loss to the Oregon State Beavers on September 25.
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Original:  USC's win finished the season with a record of 12-1 due to an upset loss to the Oregon State Beavers  on September 25.
Revised:  USC's win finished the season with a record of 12-1 during their 2008 season, the sole loss coming when the Oregon State Beavers on September 25.
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Original:  The Trojan offense surged in the first half, scoring four touchdowns and kicking a field goal to make the score a 31 to 7 USC lead by halftimeagainst the defense of Penn Statethat had only allowed an average of 12.7 points per game prior to the matchup . Joe Paterno, the longtime coach of Penn State , watched his team fall behind early from the stadium's press box due to a hip injury suffered  after a player collided with him during a game.
Revised:  The Trojan offense surged in the first half, scoring four touchdowns and a field goal to make the score a 31 to 7 USC lead by halftimeagainst the defense of Penn Statethat had only allowed an average of 12.7 points per game prior to the matchup . Joe Paterno, the longtime coach of Penn State , watched his team fall behind early from the stadium's press box due to a hip injury suffered after a player collided with him during a game.
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Original:  The Trojan offense surged in the first half, scoring four touchdowns and kicking a field goal to make the score a 31 to 7 USC lead by halftimeagainst the defense of Penn Statethat had only allowed an average of 12.7 points per game prior to the matchup . Joe Paterno, the longtime coach of Penn State , watched his team fall behind early from the stadium's press box due to a hip injury suffered  after a player collided with him during a game.
Revised:  The Trojan offense surged in the first half, scoring four touchdowns and kicking a field goal to give USC a 31-7 USC lead at halftime. Prior to the game Penn State's defense only allowed an average of 12.7 points per game prior to the matchup . Joe Paterno, the longtime coach of Penn State , watched his team fall behind early from the stadium's press box due to a hip injury suffered after a player collided with him during a game.
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Original:  The Trojan offense surged in the first half, scoring four touchdowns and kicking a field goal to make the score a 31 to 7 USC lead by halftimeagainst the defense of Penn Statethat had only allowed an average of 12.7 points per game prior to the matchup . Joe Paterno, the longtime coach of Penn State , watched his team fall behind early from the stadium's press box due to a hip injury suffered  after a player collided with him during a game.
Revised:  The Trojan offense surged in the first half, scoring four touchdowns and kicking a field goal to make the score a 31 to 7 USC lead by halftimeagainst the defense of Penn Statethat had only allowed an average of 12.7 points per game . Joe Paterno, the longtime coach of Penn State , watched his team fall behind early from the stadium's press box due to a hip injury suffered after a player collided with him during a game.
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Original:  The Trojan offense surged in the first half, scoring four touchdowns and kicking a field goal to make the score a 31 to 7 USC lead by halftimeagainst the defense of Penn Statethat had only allowed an average of 12.7 points per game prior to the matchup . Joe Paterno, the longtime coach of Penn State , watched his team fall behind early from the stadium's press box due to a hip injury suffered  after a player collided with him during a game.
Revised:  The Trojan offense surged in the first half, scoring four touchdowns and kicking a field goal to make the score a 31 to 7 USC lead by halftimeagainst the defense of Penn Statethat had only allowed an average of 12.7 points per game prior to the matchup . Joe Paterno, Penn State's head coach since 1966 , watched his team fall behind early from the stadium's press box due to a hip injury suffered after a player collided with him during a game.
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Original:  After USC increased their lead to 24 points, a television camera showed a shot of Paterno in the press box shaking his head.
Revised:  After USC increased their lead to 24 points, television broadcast a shot of Paterno in the press box shaking his head.
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Original:  Paterno commented , "They certainly deserved to win it, but I'm a little disappointed that we weren't a little bit more competitive.
Revised:  Paterno commented : "They certainly deserved to win it, but I'm a little disappointed that we weren't a little bit more competitive.
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Original:  Maybe a little bit of both.  
Revised:  Maybe a little bit of both. " 
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Original:  She had no need for a mobility scooter - instead she lived on her farm and moved with a walking frame, declining nursing care.
Revised:  She had no need for a mobility scooter — instead she lived on her farm and moved with a walking frame, declining nursing care.
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Original:  The vegetarian, non-smoking, teetotal farmer had only visited hospital once in her life, and outlived her husband , by 57 years, and 2 of her 5 children.
Revised:  The vegetarian, non-smoking, teetotal farmer had only visited hospital once in her life, outliving her husband by 57 years, and 2 of her 5 children.
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Original:  However, due to sight and hearing problems, she could not recognise her family, including daughter Madalena, 84, whom she lived with.
Revised:  However, due to sight and hearing problems, she could not recognize her family, including daughter Madalena, 84, whom she lived with.
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Original:  She bacame the world's oldest person after the November 26 death of American Edna Parker, who was 115 years and 220 days old.
Revised:  She became the world's oldest person after the November 26 death of American Edna Parker, who was 115 years and 220 days old.
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Original:  The vegetarian, non-smoking, teetotal farmer had only visited  hospital once in her life, outliving her husband by 57 years, and 2 of her 5 children.
Revised:  The vegetarian, non-smoking, teetotal farmer had only visited a hospital once in her life, outliving her husband by 57 years, and 2 of her 5 children.
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Original:  The vegetarian, non-smoking, teetotal farmer had only visited  hospital once in her life, outliving her husband by 57 years, and 2 of her 5 children.
Revised:  The vegetarian, non-smoking, teetotal farmer had only visited hospital once in her life, outliving her husband by 57 years, and two of her five children.
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Original:  As well as those 5 children, she had 11 grandchildren, 16 great-grandchildren and 6 great-great-grandchildren.
Revised:  De Jesus has five children, had 11 grandchildren, 16 great-grandchildren and 6 great-great-grandchildren.
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Original:  As well as those 5 children, she had 11 grandchildren, 16 great-grandchildren and 6 great-great-grandchildren.
Revised:  As well as those 5 children, she had 11 grandchildren, 16 great-grandchildren and six great-great-grandchildren.
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Original:  However, due to sight and hearing problems, she could not recognize her family, including daughter Madalena, 84,  whom she lived with .
Revised:  However, due to sight and hearing problems, she could not recognize her family, including daughter Madalena, 84, with whom she lived with .
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Original:  However, due to sight and hearing problems, she could not recognize her family, including daughter Madalena, 84,  whom she lived with .
Revised:  However, due to sight and hearing problems, she could not recognize her family, including daughter Madalena, 84, whom she lived .
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Original:  The cause of her death is either unknown or has not yet been released , but may be related to her age .
Revised:  The cause of her death is either unknown or has not yet been released .
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Original: ]] Portugese Maria de Jesus died Tuesday, at 115 years and 114 days old.
Revised: ]] Portuguese Maria de Jesus died Tuesday, at 115 years and 114 days old.
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Original:  However, due to sight and hearing problems, she could not  recognize her family, including daughter Madalena, 84, with whom she lived.
Revised:  However, due to sight and hearing problems, she could not easiliy recognize her family, including daughter Madalena, 84, with whom she lived.
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Original:  As sewage and blood runs through the streets, many Gazans are trying to flee the area by storming the border with Egypt, a move which Egyptian police blocked on Sunday and are planning to do so again today as Egyptian leaders ordered their policemen to open fire on Gazans trying to flee into Egypt . Meanwhile hospitals in Gaza say that they are completely out of even the most basic medical supplies and have little or no capacity to deal with further casualties .
Revised:  As sewage and blood runs through the streets, many Gazans are trying to flee the area by storming the border with Egypt, a move which Egyptian police blocked on Sunday and are planning to do so again today as Egyptian leaders ordered their policemen to open fire on Gazans trying to flee into Egypt Meanwhile hospitals in Gaza say that they are completely out of even the most basic medical supplies and have little or no capacity to deal with further casualties .
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Original:  As sewage and blood runs through the streets, many Gazans are trying to flee the area by storming the border with Egypt, a move which Egyptian police blocked on Sunday and are planning to do so again today as Egyptian leaders ordered their policemen to open fire on Gazans trying to flee into Egypt . Meanwhile hospitals in Gaza say that they are completely out of even the most basic medical supplies and have little or no capacity to deal with further casualties .
Revised:  As sewage and blood runs through the streets, many Gazans are trying to flee the area by storming the border with Egypt, a move which Egyptian police blocked on Sunday and are planning to do so again today as Egyptian leaders ordered their policemen to open fire on Gazans trying to flee into Egypt . .
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Original:  The international community are standing unable to help us, and yet we know they have been helping Israel for tens of years.  
Revised:  The international community are standing unable to help us, and yet we know they have been helping Israel for tens of years. " 
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Original: Global chemical manufacturer LyondellBasell - the third-largest private chemical company in the world - has collapsed.
Revised: frameGlobal chemical manufacturer LyondellBasell - the third-largest private chemical company in the world - has collapsed.
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Original:  The firm filed for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection in the United States, as well as the Dutch equivelent .
Revised:  The firm filed for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection in the United States, as well as the Dutch equivalent .
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Original: Headquartered in The Netherlands, LyondellBasell is owned by private equity tycoon Len Blavatnik, who had already refused the company a loan to help deal with debt resulting from a $12.7 billion merger between Basell International Holdings and Lyondell Chemical to create LyondellBasell Industries.
Revised: Headquartered in The Netherlands, LyondellBasell is owned by industrialist Len Blavatnik, who had already refused the company a loan to help deal with debt resulting from a $12.7 billion merger between Basell International Holdings and Lyondell Chemical to create LyondellBasell Industries.
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Original:  He was the eldest of the couple's two children        
Revised:  He was the eldest of the couple's two children We invite everyone to try our service, and well try our best to fully satisfy your needs. Also we can assemble the watch according to your specifications, for exampl dial color, case backs, etc. We also sell bracelets, bands, crowns and other watch parts separately. If we use genuine Swiss movement we can assure you it will be 100\% Swiss movement. If we use Asian movements it will be exactly what we advertise. 
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Original: Smoke rises above Gaza after an Israeli air strike on a Hamas target, December 29, 2008.
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