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Original:  The constructed ‘narrative networks’ connect the events by causal relationships, viz. if action B lead to action A, then A and B will be linked.
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Original:  These research strategies may have to be diversified in order to study aspects such as political influence and other non-institutional features of organisations or groups reported by the author through narration.
Revised:  These research strategies may have to be diversified to study aspects such as political influence and other non-institutional features of organisations or groups reported by the author through narration.
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Original:  These videos were included in their daily playlist for some time, where he featured amongst artists such as Placido Domingo, Andrea Bocelli, Katherine Jenkins, Sarah Brightman, Josh Groban, and André Rieu.
Revised:  These videos were included in their daily playlist for some time, where he featured amongst artists such as Plácido Domingo, Andrea Bocelli, Katherine Jenkins, Sarah Brightman, Josh Groban, and André Rieu.
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Original:  It also includes the classical piece "" ("Time To Say Goodbye").
Revised:  It also includes the classical piece "" ("Time to Say Goodbye").
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Original:  Afrikaanse Juwele (meaning " African jewels"), de Jager's fourth album, reached gold status within two months and became the top-selling Afrikaans album for six consecutive weeks.
Revised:  Afrikaanse Juwele (meaning " Afrikaans jewels"), de Jager's fourth album, reached gold status within two months and became the top-selling Afrikaans album for six consecutive weeks.
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Original:  He appeared three times on the most popular show currently, Noot vir Noot (meaning 'Note by Note'), an Afrikaans musical quiz presented by Johan Stemmet.
Revised:  He appeared three times on the most popular show currently, Noot vir Noot (meaning 'Note for Note'), an Afrikaans musical quiz presented by Johan Stemmet.
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Original:  founded by the Catholic Visigoth bishop Masona at Mérida, Spain 706/707Al-Wahid Bimarstan, first Islamic hospital built in Damascus 727Ospedale di Santo Spirito in Sassia hospital established in Italy800 or earlierEarly hospital established in Sri Lanka at Mihintale805Medieval Islamic Bimaristan (hospital)
Revised:  founded by the Catholic Visigoth bishop Masona at Mérida, Spain 706/707Al-Wahid Bimarstan, first Islamic hospital built in Damascus 727Ospedale di Santo Spirito in Sassia hospital established in Italy800 or earlierEarly hospital established in Sri Lanka at Mihintale.805Medieval Islamic Bimaristan (hospital)
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Original: The history of hospitals began in antiquity with hospitals in Saudi Arabia, the Arab Empire and on the Indian subcontinent as well, starting with precursors in the Asclepian temples in ancient Greece and then the military hospitals in ancient Rome.
Revised: The history of hospitals began in antiquity with hospitals in Greece, the Roman Empire and on the Indian subcontinent as well, starting with precursors in the Asclepian temples in ancient Greece and then the military hospitals in ancient Rome.
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Original:  Natural Resources Forum publishes peer-reviewed articles, book reviews and a 'Viewpoints' section where contributors provide different views on a particular topic.
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Original:  Natural Resources Forum publishes peer-reviewed articles, book reviews and a 'Viewpoints' section where contributors provide different views on a particular topic.
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Original:  Specific topics of interest to this journal include agriculture, energy, globalization  and natural resources.
Revised:  Specific topics of interest to this journal include agriculture, energy, globalization , and natural resources.
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Original:  Natural Resources Forum publishes articles, book reviews, and a "Viewpoints" section, where contributors provide different views on a particular topic.
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Original:  Upon Halil's death however  he resumed his former title.
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Original:  But he died no sooner than 1343 when he campaigned to Armenians of Cilicia.
Revised:  But he died no sooner than 1343 when he campaigned to Armenian Kingdom of Cilicia.
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Original: İbrahim I, a.k.a.
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Original:  Bedrettin İbrahim , was a bey of Karaman Beylik , a Turkish principality in Anatolia in the 14th century.
Revised:  Bedrettin Ibrahim , was a bey of Karaman Beylik , a Turkish principality in Anatolia in the 14th century.
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Original:  Ali Sevim: Türkiye tarihi Cilt I, AKDTYKTTK Yayınları, İstanbul, 1991 p 245 But soon İbrahim laid claim to throne and rebelled in 1318.
Revised:  Ali Sevim: Türkiye tarihi Cilt I, AKDTYKTTK Yayınları, İstanbul, 1991 p 245 But soon Ibrahim laid claim to throne and rebelled in 1318.
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Original:  Although the details of the civil war are not known, according to Ibn Battuta, the famous Arabian traveller who acted as İbrahim 's envoy to Mamluk Sultanate of Egypt, he won the throne with the help of Mamluks.
Revised:  Although the details of the civil war are not known, according to Ibn Battuta, the famous Arabian traveller who acted as Ibrahim 's envoy to Mamluk Sultanate of Egypt, he won the throne with the help of Mamluks.
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Original:  In 1942, he was the first to speak at the Yan'an Forum after Mao's opening statement.
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Original:  People's Republic era and death%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He began writing again professionally in the 1950s in Beijing.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Xiao Hong Lao She Ding Ling Wen Yiduo May Fourth Movement References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Manchu people Category:Republic of China novelists Category:Writers from Liaoning Category:1907 births Category:1988 deaths Category:People from Jinzhou Category:Victims of the Cultural Revolution Category:20th-century novelists Category:Chinese male novelis
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Xiao Hong Lao She Ding Ling Wen Yiduo May Fourth Movement References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Manchu people Category:Republic of China novelists Category:Writers from Liaoning Category:1907 births Category:1988 deaths Category:People from Jinzhou Category:Victims of the Cultural Revolution Category:20th-century novelists Category:Chinese male novelis
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Original:  The second belongs to Theo van Gogh ( film director) ( van Gogh's brother's great grandson) on the day he was assassinated in Amsterdam in November 2004.
Revised:  The second belongs to Theo van Gogh ( van Gogh's brother's great grandson) on the day he was assassinated in Amsterdam in November 2004.
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Original: Plot Structure Head in Flames is a novel built out of a series of miconarratives that record the sensations, observations, and memories of three alternating disembodied voices, each of which inhabits a different font as well as aesthetic, political, existential space.
Revised:  Structure Head in Flames is a novel built out of a series of miconarratives that record the sensations, observations, and memories of three alternating disembodied voices, each of which inhabits a different font as well as aesthetic, political, existential space.
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Original: Plot Structure Head in Flames is a novel built out of a series of miconarratives that record the sensations, observations, and memories of three alternating disembodied voices, each of which inhabits a different font as well as aesthetic, political, existential space.
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Original:  The consequence is an investigation of art's multiplicity of purposes, religion's increasingly dominant role as engine of politics and extremism in the contemporary world, the complexities involved in foreignness/assimilation, and the limits of cultural tolerance.
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Original:     Reception Rain Taxi wrote that Head in Flames is "distinguished both by its inventive, playful form and its evocative content," while Review of Contemporary Fiction called Olsen's novel "an important book" whose "structure is a tour de force of formal innovation calling to mind Pinget's That Voice, Rulfo’s Pedro Páramo, and Cortázar’s Hopscotch….
Revised: Plot Reception Rain Taxi wrote that Head in Flames is "distinguished both by its inventive, playful form and its evocative content," while Review of Contemporary Fiction called Olsen's novel "an important book" whose "structure is a tour de force of formal innovation calling to mind Pinget's That Voice, Rulfo’s Pedro Páramo, and Cortázar’s Hopscotch….
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Original:  The first voice belongs to Vincent van Gogh on the day he shot himself in Auvers-sur-Oise in July 1890.
Revised:  Van Gogh finds himself standing in a field in Auvers-sur-Oise in July 1890.
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Original:  The third belongs to MohammedBouyeri, Theo's murderer, outraged by the filmmaker  s collaboration with controversial politician Ayaan Hirsi Ali on a 10-minute experimental short critiquing Muslim subjugation and abuse of women.
Revised:  The third belongs to MohammedBouyeri, Theo's murderer, outraged by the filmmaker ' s collaboration with controversial politician Ayaan Hirsi Ali on a 10-minute experimental short critiquing Muslim subjugation and abuse of women.
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Original:  The consequence is an investigation of art's multiplicity of purposes , religion's increasingly dominant role as engine of politics and extremism in the contemporary world, the complexities involved in foreignness/assimilation, and the limits of cultural tolerance.
Revised:  The consequence of such a structure is a complex investigation into art's multiplicity of purposes , religion's increasingly dominant role as engine of politics and extremism in the contemporary world, the complexities involved in foreignness/assimilation, and the limits of cultural tolerance.
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Original:  The consequence is an investigation of art's multiplicity of purposes , religion's increasingly dominant role as engine of politics and extremism in the contemporary world, the complexities involved in foreignness/assimilation, and the limits of cultural tolerance.
Revised:  The consequence is an investigation of art's multiplicity of purpose , religion's increasingly dominant role as engine of politics and extremism in the contemporary world, the complexities involved in foreignness/assimilation, and the limits of cultural tolerance.
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Original: Reception Rain Taxi wrote that Head in Flames is "distinguished both by its inventive, playful form and its evocative content," while Review of Contemporary Fiction called Olsen's novel "an important book" whose "structure is a tour de force of formal innovation calling to mind Pinget's That Voice, Rulfo’s Pedro Páramo, and  Cortázar’s Hopscotch….
Revised: Reception Rain Taxi wrote that Head in Flames is "distinguished both by its inventive, playful form and its evocative content," while Review of Contemporary Fiction called Olsen's novel "an important book" whose "structure is a tour de force of formal innovation calling to mind Pinget's That Voice, Rulfo’s Pedro Páramo, and Julio Cortázar’s Hopscotch….
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Original: The Accademia degli Infiammati ("Academy of the Burning Ones") was a short-lived but influential philosophical and literary academy in Padua  .
Revised: The Accademia degli Infiammati ("Academy of the Burning Ones") was a short-lived but influential philosophical and literary academy in Padua , in northern Italy .
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Original: In December 2011, he challenged the Muslim Brotherhood and the Salafists to reveal the source of funding for their electoral campaigns, while adding that he himself was revealing all his campaign financing matters.
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Original:  On 8 December, after Morsi sought to address some of the protesters' demands, Isaac said that Morsi’s new declaration "does not answer people’s demands ,” and that new ways would be sought to escalate pressure on Morsi .
Revised:  On 8 December, after Morsi sought to address some of the protesters' demands, Isaac said that Morsi’s new declaration "does not answer people’s demands ", and the work would continue .
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Original:  The EFSA rejected a claim that a cause and effect relationship existed between the dietary intake of calcium and potassium and maintenance of normal acid-base balance.
Revised:  The EFSA rejected a claim that a cause-and-effect relationship existed between the dietary intake of calcium and potassium and maintenance of normal acid-base balance.
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Original:  2016 it was revised to 1300 mg to bring it into agreement with the RDA. Compliance with the updated labeling regulations was required by 1 January 2020 ,
Revised:  2016 it was revised to 1300 mg to bring it into agreement with the RDA. Compliance with the updated labeling regulations was required by 1 January 2020 
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Original:  A table of the old and new adult Daily Values is provided at Reference Daily Intake.
Revised:  A table of the old and new adult daily values is provided at Reference Daily Intake.
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Original: Calcium ions (Ca2+) contribute to the physiology and biochemistry of organisms cell .
Revised: Calcium ions (Ca2+) contribute to the physiology and biochemistry of organism's cells .
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Original: Calcium ions (Ca2+) contribute to the physiology and biochemistry of organism' s cells.
Revised: Calcium ions (Ca2+) contribute to the physiology and biochemistry of organisms' cells.
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Original: Qualified Health Claims: Letter of Enforcement Discretion - Calcium and Hypertension;
Revised: Qualified Health Claims: Letter of Enforcement Discretion – Calcium and Hypertension;
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Original: Qualified Health Claims: Letter Regarding Calcium and Colon/Rectal, Breast, and Prostate Cancers and Recurrent Colon Polyps - (Docket No. 2004Q-0097) U.S. Food and Drug Administration (2005).
Revised: Qualified Health Claims: Letter Regarding Calcium and Colon/Rectal, Breast, and Prostate Cancers and Recurrent Colon Polyps (Docket No. 2004Q-0097) U.S. Food and Drug Administration (2005).
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Original: Qualified Health Claims: Letter of Denial - Calcium and Kidney Stones;
Revised: Qualified Health Claims: Letter of Denial – Calcium and Kidney Stones;
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Original:  1992 Jun;38(6): 904-8.
Revised:  1992 Jun;38(6): 904–08.
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Original: Within a typical cell, the intracellular concentration of ionized calcium is roughly 100 nM, but is subject to increases of 10– to 100-fold during various cellular functions.
Revised: Within a typical cell, the intracellular concentration of ionized calcium is roughly 100 nM, but is subject to increases of 10- to 100-fold during various cellular functions.
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Original:  164:3, 839-852. (2011).
Revised:  164:3, 839–52. (2011).
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Original:  Circulation Research. 87, 840-844. (2000).
Revised:  Circulation Research. 87, 840–44. (2000).
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Original:  In electrically excitable cells, such as skeletal and cardiac muscles and neurons, membrane depolarization leads to a Ca2+ transient with cytosolic Ca2+ concentration reaching around 1 URL Mitochondria are capable of sequestering and storing some of that Ca2+.
Revised:  In electrically excitable cells, such as skeletal and cardiac muscles and neurons, membrane depolarization leads to a Ca2+ transient with cytosolic Ca2+ concentration reaching around 1 uM. Mitochondria are capable of sequestering and storing some of that Ca2+.
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Original:  For U.S. food and dietary supplement labeling purposes the amount in a serving is expressed as a percent of Daily Value (\%DV).
Revised: Labeling For U.S. food and dietary supplement labeling purposes the amount in a serving is expressed as a percent of Daily Value (\%DV).
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Original:  For calcium labeling purposes 100\% of the Daily Value was 1000 mg, but as of May 27, 2016 it was revised to 1300 mg to bring it into agreement with the RDA . Compliance with the updated labeling regulations was required by 1 January 2020 for manufacturers with US$10 million or more in annual food sales, and by 1 January 2021 for manufacturers with lower volume food sales .
Revised:  For calcium labeling purposes 100\% of the Daily Value was 1000 mg, but as of May 27, 2016 it was revised to 1300 mg to bring it into agreement with the RDA .
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Original:  The bonobo chimpanzee species (Pan paniscus) has heavier testicles than the common chimpanzee species (Pan troglodytes).
Revised:  The bonobo chimpanzee species (Pan paniscus) has heavier testicles than the chimpanzee species (Pan troglodytes).
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Original:  A number of studies, including Alfred Kinsey's, have concluded that the average age group in which women are the most active sexually is their mid-thirties, one study liberally estimating 27-45 as the limits of the age group (the average man peaks earlier).
Revised:  A number of studies, including Alfred Kinsey's, have concluded that the average age group in which women are the most active sexually is their mid-thirties, one study liberally estimating 27–45 as the limits of the age group (the average man peaks earlier).
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Original:  New York: Stein and Day. p .276.
Revised:  New York: Stein and Day. p . 276.
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Original:  Public opinion has fluctuated over the centuries, with such downturns as New England Puritanism (1630 — 1660) and the Victorian era (1837 — 1901), when hypersexuality was often treated as an exclusively female disorder, diagnosed on the grounds of as little as masturbation alone (see here).
Revised:  Public opinion has fluctuated over the centuries, with such downturns as New England Puritanism (1630 – 1660) and the Victorian era (1837 — 1901), when hypersexuality was often treated as an exclusively female disorder, diagnosed on the grounds of as little as masturbation alone (see here).
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Original:  Public opinion has fluctuated over the centuries, with such downturns as New England Puritanism (1630 — 1660) and the Victorian era (1837 — 1901), when hypersexuality was often treated as an exclusively female disorder, diagnosed on the grounds of as little as masturbation alone (see here).
Revised:  Public opinion has fluctuated over the centuries, with such downturns as New England Puritanism (1630 — 1660) and the Victorian era (1837 – 1901), when hypersexuality was often treated as an exclusively female disorder, diagnosed on the grounds of as little as masturbation alone (see here).
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Original:  The documentary Japan — Female Sexuality touched on the subject from a 1990s perspective, and reported the trend to be increasing.
Revised:  The documentary Japan – Female Sexuality touched on the subject from a 1990s perspective, and reported the trend to be increasing.
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Original:  Proponents of cultural evolution argue that this is not enough time for humans to have developed the advanced cognitive capabilities required to create tools, language, and  societies through biological evolution.
Revised:  Proponents of cultural evolution argue that this would not have been enough time for humans to have developed the advanced cognitive capabilities required to create tools, language, and societies through biological evolution.
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Original:  Proponents of cultural evolution argue that this is not enough time for humans to have developed the advanced cognitive capabilities required to create tools, language, and  societies through biological evolution.
Revised:  Proponents of cultural evolution argue that this is not enough time for humans to develop the advanced cognitive capabilities required to create tools, language, and societies through biological evolution.
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Original:  Proponents of cultural evolution argue that this is not enough time for humans to have developed the advanced cognitive capabilities required to create tools, language, and  societies through biological evolution.
Revised:  Proponents of cultural evolution argue that this is not enough time for humans to have developed the advanced cognitive capabilities required to create tools, language, and build societies through biological evolution.
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Original:  This unique  distinguishes humans from related primates, who do not seem to build collaborative knowledge over time.
Revised:  This unique ability distinguishes humans from related primates, who do not seem to build collaborative knowledge over time.
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Original:  Chimpanzees, for example, seem to be able to think about what others see, and predict behavior based on these beliefs  .
Revised:  Chimpanzees, for example, demonstrated an ability to think about what others see, and predict behavior based on these beliefs .
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Original:  For example, subordinate chimpanzees in one experiment avoided food that they knew the dominant chimpanzee could see, but sought food that the dominant chimpanzee could not see because of a physical barrier.
Revised:  For example, subordinate chimpanzees in one experiment avoided food that they knew the dominant chimpanzee could see, but sought food that the dominant chimpanzee could not see due to a physical barrier.
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Original:  In another experiment, subordinate chimpanzees went after the food based on whether or not the dominant chimpanzee had seen the human researcher place the food behind the barrier.
Revised:  In another experiment, subordinate chimpanzees made decisions about approaching food based on whether or not the dominant chimpanzee had seen the human researcher place the food behind the barrier.
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Original:   Simultaneous sociogenesis occurs when two or more individuals work together in time to create something new.
Revised:  Simultaneous sociogenesis occurs when two or more individuals work together at the same time and develop something new.
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Original:  However,  if you look at these concepts with historical processes in mind, another plausible explanation is that language, but not math, developed before people split into different populations.
Revised:  However, if you look at these concepts with historical processes in mind, another plausible explanation could be that language, but not math, developed before people split into different populations.
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