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Original:  The Philippine Daily Inquirer reported that Mila is the 8th journalist killed in the Philippines this year and the 62nd since 2001, when President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo came to power , bringing to 122 the number of media people murdered since President Cory Aquino overthrew the Marcos dictatorship in 1986.
Revised:  The Philippine Daily Inquirer reported that Mila is the 8th journalist killed in the Philippines this year and the 62nd since 2001, when President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo came to power . A total of 122 media people have been murdered since President Cory Aquino overthrew the Marcos dictatorship in 1986.
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Original:  Meanwhile, the Department of Justice (Philippines) 's Undersecretary Ricardo Blancaflor, chairman of the "Task Force 211" - Against Political Violence and Extrajudicial killings and forced disappearances in the Philippines announced sending a probe team  to Northern Samar.
Revised:  Meanwhile, the Department of Justice 's Undersecretary Ricardo Blancaflor, chairman of the "Task Force 211" - Against Political Violence and Extrajudicial killings and forced disappearances in the Philippines announced sending a probe team to Northern Samar.
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Original:  Meanwhile, the Department of Justice (Philippines) 's Undersecretary Ricardo Blancaflor, chairman of the "Task Force 211" - Against Political Violence and Extrajudicial killings and forced disappearances in the Philippines announced sending a probe team  to Northern Samar.
Revised:  Meanwhile, the Department of Justice (Philippines) 's Undersecretary Ricardo Blancaflor, chairman of the "Task Force 211" - Against Political Violence and Extrajudicial killings and forced disappearances in the Philippines , announced that a probe team to Northern Samar.
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Original:  Meanwhile, the Department of Justice (Philippines) 's Undersecretary Ricardo Blancaflor, chairman of the "Task Force 211" - Against Political Violence and Extrajudicial killings and forced disappearances in the Philippines announced sending a probe team  to Northern Samar.
Revised:  Meanwhile, the Department of Justice (Philippines) 's Undersecretary Ricardo Blancaflor, chairman of the "Task Force 211" - Against Political Violence and Extrajudicial killings and forced disappearances in the Philippines announced sending a probe team would be sent to Northern Samar.
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Original:  The Northern Samar police provincial office has also formed "Task Force Mila" to investigate the killing as two local politicians offered a P100,000  bounty for any information leading to the capture of the suspects.
Revised:  The Northern Samar provincial police office has also formed "Task Force Mila" to investigate the killing as two local politicians offered a P100,000 bounty for any information leading to the capture of the suspects.
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Original:  Meanwhile, the Committee to Protect Journalists (CPJ) said that "it is time for the central government, as well as local authorities, to promptly address the climate of impunity that is facilitating rising violence against Philippine journalists.
Revised:  Meanwhile, the Committee to Protect Journalists (CPJ) said , "it is time for the central government, as well as local authorities, to promptly address the climate of impunity that is facilitating rising violence against Philippine journalists.
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Original:  The report  concluded that veterans given the pills died of brain cancer at abnormally high rates unexplainable by any other factors .
Revised:  The report also concluded that veterans given the pills died of brain cancer at abnormally high rates unexplainable by any other factors .
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Original:  Other problems associated with the illness are: fatigue, headaches, joint pain, rashes, breathing difficulty, forgetfulness, circulation problems  and cardiac troubles.
Revised:  Other problems associated with the condition are: fatigue, headaches, joint pain, rashes, breathing difficulty, forgetfulness, circulation problems and cardiac troubles.
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Original:  Other problems associated with the illness are: fatigue, headaches, joint pain, rashes, breathing difficulty, forgetfulness, circulation problems  and cardiac troubles.
Revised:  Other problems associated with the illness are: fatigue, headaches, joint pain, rashes, breathing difficulty, forgetfulness, circulation problems , and cardiac troubles.
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Original:  The United States government claimed that the illness was merely psychological trauma from war misinterpreted as an illness, and veterans could not recieve medical coverage for the illness.
Revised:  The United States government claimed that the illness was merely psychological trauma from war misinterpreted as an illness, and veterans could not receive medical coverage for the illness.
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Original: The report estimates that  anywhere between 175,000 and 210,000 soldiers are effected by this illness .
Revised: The report estimates that anywhere between 175,000 and 210,000 soldiers are affected .
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Original:  Several other factors likely contributed to Gulf War Syndrome, including the excessive use of pesticides by the troops, mainly Permethrin and DEET, and exposure to chemical weapons residue caused by the American demolition of the Iraqi  depot in Khamisiyah.
Revised:  Several other factors likely contributed to Gulf War Syndrome, including the excessive use of pesticides by the troops, mainly Permethrin and DEET, and exposure to chemical weapons residue caused by the American demolition of the Iraqi munitions depot in Khamisiyah.
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Original:  The report also concluded that veterans exposed to these the toxins spread by the destruction of the munitions dump have died of brain cancer at double the rate of other Gulf War veterans.
Revised:  The report also concluded that veterans exposed to the toxins spread by the destruction of the munitions dump have died of brain cancer at double the rate of other Gulf War veterans.
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Original:  The report also concluded that veterans exposed to these the toxins spread by the destruction of the munitions dump have died of brain cancer at double the rate of other Gulf War veterans.
Revised:  The report also concluded that veterans exposed to these the toxins spread by the destruction of the munitions depot have died of brain cancer at double the rate of other Gulf War veterans.
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Original:  Several other factors likely contributed to Gulf War Syndrome, including the excessive use of pesticidesby the troops , mainly Permethrin and DEET, and exposure to chemical weapons residue caused by the American demolition of the Iraqi munitions depot in Khamisiyah.
Revised:  Several other factors likely contributed to Gulf War Syndrome, including excessive exposure to pesticides , mainly Permethrin and DEET, and exposure to chemical weapons residue caused by the American demolition of the Iraqi munitions depot in Khamisiyah.
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Original: Every sixth child under the age of five is acutely malnourished, and three and a quarter million people are in need of urgent aid, a number 77\% higher than last year, according to the Food Security Analysis Unit, which is based in Nairobi, Kenya.
Revised: Every sixth child under the age of five is acutely malnourished, and three and a quarter million people are in need of immediate aid, a number 77\% higher than last year, according to the Food Security Analysis Unit, which is based in Nairobi, Kenya.
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Original:  Few aid agencies are able to operate in Somalia, due mainly to the rampant levels of violence there , the latest of which saw almost a hundred ships being seized by pirates in Somali waters this year  .
Revised:  Few aid agencies are able to operate in Somalia, due mainly to the high levels of violence there , the latest of which saw almost a hundred ships being seized by pirates in Somali waters this year .
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Original:  Few aid agencies are able to operate in Somalia, due mainly to the rampant levels of violence there , the latest of which saw almost a hundred ships being seized by pirates in Somali waters this year  .
Revised:  Few aid agencies are able to operate in Somalia, due mainly to the rampant levels of violence there : almost one hundred ships being seized by pirates in Somali waters this year .
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Original:  In 2008 alone, 23 aid workers have been killed in the country, and a further 18 abducted.
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Original:  Stephen Harper , official portrait Michaëlle Jean, file phot  
Revised:  Michaëlle Jean, file phot 
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Original:  He said Harper has "placed partisan politics ahead of the interest of all Canadians.      
Revised:  He said Harper has "placed partisan politics ahead of the interest of all Canadians. " 
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Original:  On Thursday, Harper obtained the consent of the Governor General, Michaëlle Jean, to prorogue , a parliamentary procedure which suspends the legislature without dissolving it.
Revised:  On Thursday, Harper obtained the consent of the Governor General, Michaëlle Jean, to prorogue Parliament, a procedure which suspends the legislature without dissolving it.
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Original:  This prevents the Parliament from overthrowing the government and  calling a new election.
Revised:  This prevents the Parliament from overthrowing the government and avoids calling a new election.
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Original: Stephen Harper, official portrait The Parliament of Canada has been suspended until January 26, 2009  by Prime Minster Stephen Harper.
Revised: Stephen Harper, official portrait The Parliament of Canada has been suspended until January 26, 2009 , by Prime Minster Stephen Harper.
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Original: Stephen Harper, official portrait The Parliament of Canada has been suspended until January 26, 2009, by Prime Minster Stephen Harper.
Revised:  The Parliament of Canada has been suspended until January 26, 2009, by Prime Minster Stephen Harper.
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Original:  Stéphane Dion, file photo Stéphane Dion, the leader of the Liberal Party, who was positioned to become the new Prime Minister, said the coalition would still seek to replace Harper barring a "monumental change" in his policies.
Revised:  Stéphane Dion, the leader of the Liberal Party, who was positioned to become the new Prime Minister, said the coalition would still seek to replace Harper barring a "monumental change" in his policies.
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Original: Bombings strike Iraqi city  According to local police, two suspected car bombs detonated in the Iraqi city of Fallujah, killing at least fifteen people and injuring several dozen more.
Revised: Bombings strike Iraqi city According to local police, two suspected car bombs detonated in the city of Falluja, Iraq, killing at least fifteen people and injuring several dozen more.
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Original:  Fallujah is located in the eastern part of the Iraqi province of Anbar .
Revised:  Fallujah is located in the eastern part of the Al Anbar Governorate .
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Original:  The city was at the centre of a rebellion led by Sunnis against US forces after the latter invaded Iraq in 2003
Revised:  The city was at the centre of a Sunni-led rebellion against US forces after the latter invaded Iraq in 2003
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Original: The Panamanian cruise ship MV Ciudad de Ushuaiahas run aground near Cape Anna at the entrance to Wilhelmina Bay.
Revised: The Panamanian-flagged cruise ship MV Ciudad de Ushuaiahas run aground near Cape Anna at the entrance to Wilhelmina Bay.
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Original:  The Antarctic Dream, at seven nautical miles away, made its way to collect and transfer passengers to Tierra del Fuego.
Revised:  The Antarctic Dream, at seven nautical miles away, was reported to have changed course to collect and transfer passengers to Tierra del Fuego.
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Original:   Meanwhile, Jon Bowermaster, a writer aboard the National Geographic Explorer, described the situation: “ We had hurricane winds yesterday — 103 miles per hour and gusting — which may have contributed to the grounding. ”
Revised:  Meanwhile, Jon Bowermaster, a writer aboard the National Geographic Explorer, described the situation: " We had hurricane winds yesterday — 103 miles per hour and gusting — which may have contributed to the grounding. ”
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Original:   Meanwhile, Jon Bowermaster, a writer aboard the National Geographic Explorer, described the situation: “ We had hurricane winds yesterday — 103 miles per hour and gusting — which may have contributed to the grounding. ”
Revised:  Meanwhile, Jon Bowermaster, a writer aboard the National Geographic Explorer, described the situation: “ We had hurricane winds yesterday — 103 miles per hour and gusting — which may have contributed to the grounding. "
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Original: Former United States football player O.J. Simpson has been sentenced to gaol for fifteen years today, on charges of kidnapping and and armed robbery of two sports memorabilia dealers at a hotel in Las Vegas, Nevada.
Revised: Former United States football player O.J. Simpson has been sentenced to jail for fifteen years today, on charges of kidnapping and and armed robbery of two sports memorabilia dealers at a hotel in Las Vegas, Nevada.
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Original:  Simpson , aged 61, was arrested on twelve charges of kidnapping and armed robbery in which he and his accomplices used firearms to force two sports memorabilia dealers to give him several items that Simpson thought had been stolen from him.
Revised:  Simpson , aged 61, was arrested on twelve charges of kidnapping and armed robbery in which he and his accomplices used firearms to force two sports memorabilia dealers to give him several items that Simpson felt had been stolen from him.
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Original:  In Total , Simpson will spend at least 9 years and as much as 33 years behind bars on a total of twelve charges.
Revised:  In total , Simpson will spend at least 9 years and as much as 33 years behind bars on a total of twelve charges.
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Original: Former United States football player O.J. Simpson has been sentenced to jail for fifteen years today, on charges of kidnapping and and armed robbery of two sports memorabilia dealers at a hotel in Las Vegas, Nevada.
Revised: Former United States football player O.J. Simpson has been sentenced to jail for fifteen years today, on charges of kidnapping and armed robbery of two sports memorabilia dealers at a hotel in Las Vegas, Nevada.
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Original: Former United States football player O.J. Simpson has been sentenced to jail for up to 33 years today , on charges of kidnapping and armed robbery of two sports memorabilia dealers at a hotel in Las Vegas, Nevada.
Revised: Former United States football player O.J. Simpson was sentenced to prison for up to 33 years today , on charges of kidnapping and armed robbery of two sports memorabilia dealers at a hotel in Las Vegas, Nevada.
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Original: The United States Labor Department reported that US employers cut 533,000 jobs in November, the largest such cut monthly cut for 34 years.
Revised: The United States Labor Department reported that U.S. employers cut 533,000 jobs in November, the largest such cut monthly cut for 34 years.
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Original:  In another indication of the worsening economic situation in the United States, the US unemployment rate reached a 15-year high of 6.7\%, from 6.5\% in October.
Revised:  In another indication of the worsening economic situation in the U.S., the unemployment rate reached a 15-year high of 6.7\%, from 6.5\% in October.
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Original: The job losses were  much worse than expected,  said Peter Morici, a business professor at the University of Maryland.
Revised: The job losses were " much worse than expected, said Peter Morici, a business professor at the University of Maryland.
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Original: The job losses were  much worse than expected,  said Peter Morici, a business professor at the University of Maryland.
Revised: The job losses were much worse than expected, " said Peter Morici, a business professor at the University of Maryland.
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Original:  The economy has now lost 1.26 million jobs in the past three months, after 403,000 jobs were axed in September and a further 320,000 in October.
Revised:  The economy has now lost 1.26 million jobs in the past three months, after 403,000 jobs were lost in September and a further 320,000 in October.
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Original:  Also present at the unprecidented "Silent Walk For Justice" was the family of Jason MacIntyre, a champion cyclist killed when Robert McTaggart ran him down in a van in January, for which he received a six month driving ban after conviction of careless driving.
Revised:  Also present at the unprecedented "Silent Walk For Justice" was the family of Jason MacIntyre, a champion cyclist killed when Robert McTaggart ran him down in a van in January, for which he received a six month driving ban after conviction of careless driving.
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Original:  The   mascot was introduced in 1904, as a costume character in 1921, and is even the subject of the book The Nittany Lion: An Illustrated Tale.
Revised:  The The mascot was introduced in 1904, as a costume character in 1921, and is even the subject of the book The Nittany Lion: An Illustrated Tale.
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Original:  Sheep has avoided interview requests by The Daily Collegian, Penn State's newspaper, on multiple occasions . Some earlier reports suggested that "46 current or former Penn State [football] players have been charged with crimes on 163 counts in the past six seasons."
Revised:  While most American university mascots change in appearance over the decades, the Nittany Lion remains essentially the same design as it has for generations . Some earlier reports suggested that "46 current or former Penn State [football] players have been charged with crimes on 163 counts in the past six seasons."
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Original:  Of those players charged, 27 were found guilty of at least one charge .
Revised:  Of those players charged, 27 were found guilty of at least one charge 
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Original:  See also 2008 Penn State Nittany Lions football team
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Original:  (Penn won the game 49-18. )
Revised:  (Penn won the game 49-18. 
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Original:  Penn State's Nittany Lion mascot.
Revised: James Sheep as Penn State's Nittany Lion mascot.
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Original:  Another member of the Penn State University cheerleading squad will step in to play the Nittany Lion at the 2009 Rose Bowl, after the main performer was suspended for after a DUI and summary traffic violations. 
Revised:  Another member of the Penn State University cheerleading squad will step in to play the Nittany Lion at the 2009 Rose Bowl, after the main performer was suspended for after a DUI and summary traffic violations. Penn State is the largest university in Pennsylvania and among the ten largest public universities in the United States.
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Original:  Another member of the Penn State University cheerleading squad will step in to play the Nittany Lion at the 2009 Rose Bowl, after the main performer was suspended for after a DUI and summary traffic violations.
Revised:  Another member of the Pennsylvania State University cheerleading squad will step in to play the Nittany Lion at the 2009 Rose Bowl, after the main performer was suspended for after a DUI and summary traffic violations.
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Original:  Another member of the Pennsylvania State University's cheerleading squad will step in to play the Nittany Lion at the 2009 Rose Bowl, after the main performer was suspended for after a DUI and summary traffic violations  . Penn State is the largest university in Pennsylvania and among the ten largest public universities in the United States.
Revised:  Another member of the Pennsylvania State University's cheerleading squad will step in to play the Nittany Lion at the 2009 Rose Bowl, after the main performer was suspended after being charged with DUI and summary traffic violations . Penn State is the largest university in Pennsylvania and among the ten largest public universities in the United States.
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Original:  Sheep has avoided interview requests by The Daily Collegian, Penn State's newspaper, on multiple occasions.
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Original:  The Pennsylvania State University website lists Sheep on their website as the Lion from 2007-2008, conflicting with coach White's comment that he would return in the new year.
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Original:  Some earlier reports suggested that "46 current or former Penn State%DIFDELCMD < [%%% football players have been charged with crimes on 163 counts in the past six seasons."
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% football players have been charged with crimes on 163 counts in the past six seasons."
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Original:  Some earlier reports suggested that "46 current or former Penn State%DIFDELCMD < [%%% football players have been charged with crimes on 163 counts in the past six seasons."
Revised:  Some earlier reports suggested that "46 current or former Penn State%DIFDELCMD < [%%% players have been charged with crimes on 163 counts in the past six seasons."
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Original:  It was said to be done to make selling the team easier  
Revised:  It was said to be done to make selling the team easier . 
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Original: 180px Takeo Fukui, the President and CEO of Honda Motor Co., Ltd. made a statement on Friday that the company led by him will leave Formula One before 2009.
Revised: 180px Takeo Fukui, the President and CEO of Honda made a statement on Friday that the company led by him will leave Formula One before 2009.
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Original: 180px Takeo Fukui, the President and CEO of Honda Motor Co., Ltd. made a statement on Friday that the company led by him will leave Formula One before 2009.
Revised: 180px Takeo Fukui, the President and CEO of Honda Motor Co., Ltd. made a statement on Friday that the company will leave Formula One before 2009.
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Original:  Among the causes of this decision there were the problems in the global auto industry, sub-prime mortgage, credit and financial crisis.
Revised:  Among the causes of this decision were the problems in the global auto industry, sub-prime mortgage, credit and financial crisis.
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Original:  Among the causes of this decision there were the problems in the global auto industry, sub-prime mortgage, credit and financial crisis.
Revised:  Among the causes of this decision there were the problems in the global auto industry, and the general economic crisis.
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Original:  The team Honda Racing led by Nick Fry (CEO) and Ross Brawn (Team principal) will have three months to find a new owner starting from now .
Revised:  The team Honda Racing led by Nick Fry (CEO) and Ross Brawn (Team principal) will have three months to find a new owner .
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Original:  [[Image:Rubens Barrichello Canada 2006.jpg|Rubens Barrichello driving for Honda F1 at the 2006 Canadian GP]] Honda’s 2008 race drivers, Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello, still are not confirmed for 2009 as the GP2 star Bruno Senna, the son of Ayrton Senna, his prospects to enter the Formula One now faded but still exist.
Revised:  [[Image:Rubens Barrichello Canada 2006.jpg|Rubens Barrichello driving for Honda F1 at the 2006 Canadian GP]] Honda’s 2008 race drivers, Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello, still are not confirmed for 2009 , nor is the GP2 star Bruno Senna, the son of Ayrton Senna, his prospects to enter the Formula One now faded but still exist.
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Original:  This raised fears that another major japanese automotive industrial giant, Toyota, may also quit F1.
Revised:  The pullout has raised fears that another major japanese automotive industrial giant, Toyota, may also quit F1.
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