wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Metemneo festival %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Metemneo is the traditional five-day harvest festival of the Yimchunger tribe although regarded as a solemn festival.
Revised:  Metemneo festival %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Metemneo is the traditional five-day harvest festival of the Yimkhiung tribe although regarded as a solemn festival.
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Original:  The Yimchungers pray for the souls of those who would die in the year.
Revised:  The Yimkhiungs pray for the souls of those who would die in the year.
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Original:  The Yimchungers believe that males have six souls while females have five souls.
Revised:  The Yimkhiungs believe that males have six souls while females have five souls.
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Original:  See also Yimchungrü language
Revised:  See also Yimkhiungrü language
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Original: The Guelowar (many variations: Gelwaar, Guelwaar, Guelwar, Gelwaretc.) was the maternal dynasty in the Serer pre-colonial kingdoms of Sine and Saloum (in the Senegambia, but mainly in the western area of present-day Senegal).
Revised: The Gelowar (; ), also spelled Gelwar, was the maternal dynasty in the Serer pre-colonial kingdoms of Sine and Saloum (in the Senegambia, but mainly in the western area of present-day Senegal).
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Original:  When companies consolidate their travel programs, savings come from two principle sources: • Standardized Travel Policy and Processes: Aligning travel policy rules across operational divisions and standardizing processes brings the greatest savings.
Revised:  When companies consolidate their travel programs, savings come from two principal sources: • Standardized Travel Policy and Processes: Aligning travel policy rules across operational divisions and standardizing processes brings the greatest savings.
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Original:  When companies consolidate their travel programs, savings come from two principle sources: • Standardized Travel Policy and Processes: Aligning travel policy rules across operational divisions and standardizing processes brings the greatest savings.
Revised:  When companies consolidate their travel programs, savings come from two principle sources: Standardized Travel Policy and Processes: Aligning travel policy rules across operational divisions and standardizing processes brings the greatest savings.
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Original:  • Standardized Booking and Fulfillment : By optimizing productivity of the service configuration and booking processes companies make significant savings on transaction costs.
Revised:  Standardized booking and fulfillment : By optimizing productivity of the service configuration and booking processes companies make significant savings on transaction costs.
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Original: Global travel consolidation may be defined as the convergence of the components of a managed travel program at a regional level, and is a process used by Corporate Travel Management companies.
Revised: Global travel consolidation is the convergence of the components of a managed travel program at a regional level, and is a process used by Corporate Travel Management companies.
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Original: Canadian newspaper readership is decreasing every year since 2007 and the revenue of Canada newspaper is slow.
Revised: Canadian newspaper readership has decreased every year since 2007 and the revenue of Canada newspaper is slow.
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Original: Canadian newspaper readership is decreasing every year since 2007 and the revenue of Canada newspaper is slow.
Revised: Canadian newspaper readership is decreasing every year since 2007 and the revenue of Canada newspapers is slow.
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Original:  Though Canadians have increased interest in reading newspapers as they age, the aging population impacts the aging newspaper readership more than the phenomenon of increasing readership as Canadians age .
Revised:  Though Canadians have increased interest in reading newspapers as they age, this has less of an impact .
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Original:  Comparing to the data of newspaper market in 2004, newspaper circulation declined 34\% in 2009.
Revised:  Newspaper circulation had declined 34\% in 2009.
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Original:  In 2009 , 87\% of profit of the newspapers market dependent on advertising.
Revised:  In 2009 compared to 2004.
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Original:  The U.S. population is aging, but media consumers' speed of aging is faster than the overall population (Economist) and this also apply to newspaper readership.
Revised:  The U.S. population is aging, but media consumers' speed of aging is faster than the overall population (Economist) and this also applies to newspaper readership.
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Original:  Printed newspapers are abandoning by the young than any other age group.
Revised:  Printed newspapers are being abandoned by the young than any other age group.
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Original:  Printed newspapers are abandoning by the young than any other age group.
Revised:  Printed newspapers are abandoning by the young more than by any other age group.
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Original: Long-term Cohort effect Cohort define people according to their birth of year (i.e. 1980-1989, 1990–1999) . Cohorts are affected by age and the period of time that the groups grow.
Revised: Long-term cohort effect Cohort define people according to their birth of year (i.e. 1980-1989, 1990–1999) . Cohorts are affected by age and the period of time that the groups grow.
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Original:  These make different cohorts have their only characteristics, and this is called as cohort effects . Cohort effect is further declining and aging newspaper readership.
Revised:  These make different cohorts have different characteristics; this is called as cohort effects . Cohort effect is further declining and aging newspaper readership.
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Original:  These make different cohorts have their only characteristics, and this is called as cohort effects . Cohort effect is further declining and aging newspaper readership.
Revised:  These make different cohorts have their only characteristics, and this is called a cohort effect . Cohort effect is further declining and aging newspaper readership.
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Original:  These make different cohorts have their only characteristics, and this is called as cohort effects . Cohort effect is further declining and aging newspaper readership.
Revised:  These make different cohorts have their only characteristics, and this is called as cohort effects . 
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Original:  According to the characteristics of young cohorts , their readership level is lower than other older cohort groups .
Revised:  There may be a cohort effect for newspaper readership: younger cohorts appear to read fewer newspapers than older cohort groups .
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Original: The Web becomes one of the main resources for receiving information.
Revised: The internet is becoming one of the main resources for receiving information.
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Original:  This phenomenon is even vivid in urban /city areas than the rural areas because of stable and high-speed broadband service.
Revised:  This phenomenon is even vivid in urban /city areas than the rural areas as (in some parts of the world) these have a more stable and high-speed broadband service.
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Original:  More and accurate political information gain and maintain by newspaper readers , they are more able to compare and contrast political issues compare to those who gain political information from TV.
Revised:  More and accurate political information gain and maintain by newspaper readers , they are more able to consider political issues than e.g. those who gain political information from TV.
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Original:  At the same time, TV viewers are more likely to vote according to the outlook of the candidates and the images created by TV.
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Original:  they have less time to spend on reading information (they spend more time on working to maintain living quality), have restricted from some information that the high SES have the right or easily access to, and less access to information.
Revised:  they have less time to spend on reading information (they spend more time on working to maintain living quality), and can spend less on access to information.
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Original: The U.S. population is aging , but media consumers' speed of aging is faster than the overall population (Economist) and this also applies to newspaper readership.
Revised: The U.S. population is ageing , but media consumers' speed of aging is faster than the overall population (Economist) and this also applies to newspaper readership.
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Original: The U.S. population is aging , but media consumers' speed of aging is faster than the overall population (Economist) and this also applies to newspaper readership.
Revised: The U.S. population is aging , but media consumers' speed of ageing is faster than the overall population (Economist) and this also applies to newspaper readership.
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Original:  However so do many newspapers      &     
Revised:  However so do many newspapers . & 
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Original:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
Revised:  However so do many newspapers URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
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Original:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
Revised:  However so do many newspapers . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
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Original:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
Revised:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
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Original:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
Revised:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
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Original:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
Revised:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
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Original:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Fitzgerald, M. "Canada Newspaper Readership Up." Editor%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
Revised:  However so do many newspapers . URL See also ==%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Newspaper Online newspaper Newspaper circulation Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Publisher 125. 18 (May 2, 1992): 40. Peiser, W. "Cohort replacement and the downward trend in newspaper readership."
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Original:  Wei, L. "How Newspaper Readership Affects Political Participation" Newspaper Research Journal Newspaper Research Journal 29.3 (2008): 8-23%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Top 10 Reasons the Newspaper is dying%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Newspaper publishing Category:Newspapers Category:News Category:History of newspape
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Top 10 Reasons the Newspaper is dying%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Newspaper publishing Category:Newspapers Category:News Category:History of newspape
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Original:  Wei, L. "How Newspaper Readership Affects Political Participation" Newspaper Research Journal Newspaper Research Journal 29.3 (2008): 8-23%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Top 10 Reasons the Newspaper is dying%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Newspaper publishing Category:Newspapers Category:News Category:History of newspape
Revised:  Wei, L. "How Newspaper Readership Affects Political Participation" Newspaper Research Journal Newspaper Research Journal 29.3 (2008): 8-23%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Top 10 Reasons the Newspaper is dying%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Newspaper publishing Category:Newspapers Category:News Category:History of newspape
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Original:  Wei, L. "How Newspaper Readership Affects Political Participation" Newspaper Research Journal Newspaper Research Journal 29.3 (2008): 8-23%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Top 10 Reasons the Newspaper is dying%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Newspaper publishing Category:Newspapers Category:News Category:History of newspape
Revised:  Wei, L. "How Newspaper Readership Affects Political Participation" Newspaper Research Journal Newspaper Research Journal 29.3 (2008): 8-23%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Top 10 Reasons the Newspaper is dying%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: Kangshau (or Kangcho) The Chang mythology states that the Kangshau were the first to arrive on the Earth, and therefore they are placed highest in the social hierarchy.
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Original:  Ong (or Ang/Ung) Ong is placed below Kangshau in the social hierarchy, and the village priest (Ongbou or Ungshedbou) is selected from this clan.
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Original: Chang is a Naga  of Nagaland, India.
Revised: Chang is a Naga tribe of Nagaland, India.
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Original:  The word Chang is said to have been derived  the word chognu (banyan tree), after a mythical banyan tree that grew at the now-abandoned Changsang.
Revised:  The word Chang is said to have been derived from the word chognu (banyan tree), after a mythical banyan tree that grew at the now-abandoned Changsang.
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Original: The Phoms have 4 major festivals, the most important of which is Monyu .
Revised: The Phoms have 4 major festivals, the most important of which is Monyü .
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Original:  Monyu Monyu is the most important traditional festival of the Phoms.
Revised:  Monyü Monyu is the most important traditional festival of the Phoms.
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Original:  Monyu Monyu is the most important traditional festival of the Phoms.
Revised:  Monyu Monyü is the most important traditional festival of the Phoms.
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Original:  They also believe that their ancestors migrated to Mt. Yingnyü (a mountainous Hill in Longleng district) and from their separated to different villages.
Revised:  They also believe that their ancestors migrated to Mt. Yungnyü (a mountainous Hill in Longleng district) and from their separated to different villages.
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Original:  A large number of bead-making goods comprising of 150 stone beads and roughouts, 160 drill bits, 433 faience beads and 20,000 steaite beads  were found here, indicating the site's importance as an industrial unit.
Revised:  A large number of bead-making goods comprising of 150 stone beads and roughouts, 160 drill bits, 433 faience beads and 20,000 steaite beads — were found here, indicating the site's importance as an industrial unit.
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Original: Further Reading KHARAKWAL, J.S., Y.S. RAWAT & T. OSADA.(2008) Preliminary observations on the excavation at Kanmer, Kachchh, India, in T. Osada & A. Uesugi (ed.) Linguistics, Archaeology and the Human past (Research Institute for Humanity and Nature, Occasional Paper 5): 5-24.
Revised: Further reading KHARAKWAL, J.S., Y.S. RAWAT & T. OSADA.(2008) Preliminary observations on the excavation at Kanmer, Kachchh, India, in T. Osada & A. Uesugi (ed.) Linguistics, Archaeology and the Human past (Research Institute for Humanity and Nature, Occasional Paper 5): 5-24.
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Original: A hyperoxia test is a test that is performed--usually on an infant-- to determine whether the patient's cyanosis is due to lung disease or a problem with blood URL It is performed by measuring the arterial blood gases of the patient while he breathes room air, then re-measuring the blood gases after the patient has breathed 100\% oxygen for 10 URL If the cause of the cyanosis is due to poor oxygen saturation by the lungs, allowing the patient to breath 100\% O2 will augment the lungs'
Revised: A hyperoxia test is a test that is performed--usually on an infant-- to determine whether the patient's cyanosis is due to lung disease or a problem with blood circulation.:141 It is performed by measuring the arterial blood gases of the patient while he breathes room air, then re-measuring the blood gases after the patient has breathed 100\% oxygen for 10 URL If the cause of the cyanosis is due to poor oxygen saturation by the lungs, allowing the patient to breath 100\% O2 will augment the lungs'
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Original: A hyperoxia test is a test that is performed--usually on an infant-- to determine whether the patient's cyanosis is due to lung disease or a problem with blood URL It is performed by measuring the arterial blood gases of the patient while he breathes room air, then re-measuring the blood gases after the patient has breathed 100\% oxygen for 10 URL If the cause of the cyanosis is due to poor oxygen saturation by the lungs, allowing the patient to breath 100\% O2 will augment the lungs'
Revised: A hyperoxia test is a test that is performed--usually on an infant-- to determine whether the patient's cyanosis is due to lung disease or a problem with blood URL It is performed by measuring the arterial blood gases of the patient while he breathes room air, then re-measuring the blood gases after the patient has breathed 100\% oxygen for 10 minutes.:141 If the cause of the cyanosis is due to poor oxygen saturation by the lungs, allowing the patient to breath 100\% O2 will augment the lungs'
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Original: :141 If the cause of the cyanosis is poor oxygen saturation by the lungs, allowing the patient to breathe 100\% oxygen will augment the lungs' ability to saturate the blood with oxygen, and the partial pressure of oxygen in the arterial blood will rise (usually above 150 mmHg).
Revised: :141 If the cause of the cyanosis is poor oxygen saturation by the lungs, allowing the pto saturate the blood with oxygen, and the partial pressure of oxygen in the arterial blood will rise (usually above 150 mmHg).
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Original: A hyperoxia test is used to determine whether  cyanosis is due to lung disease or a problem with blood circulation.
Revised: A hyperoxia test is used to determine whether the patient's cyanosis is due to lung disease or a problem with blood circulation.
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Original: A hyperoxia test is a test that is performed—usually on an infant—to determine whether the patient's cyanosis is due to lung disease or a problem with blood circulation. :141 It is performed by measuring the arterial blood gases of the patient while they breathe room air, then re-measuring the blood gases after the patient has breathed 100\% oxygen for 10 minutes.
Revised: A hyperoxia test is a test that is performed—usually on an infant—to determine whether the patient's cyanosis is due to lung disease or a problem with blood circulation. It is performed by measuring the arterial blood gases of the patient while they breathe room air, then re-measuring the blood gases after the patient has breathed 100\% oxygen for 10 minutes.
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Original: :141  If the cause of the cyanosis is poor oxygen saturation by the lungs, allowing the patient to breathe 100\% oxygen will augment the lungs' ability to saturate the blood with oxygen, and the partial pressure of oxygen in the arterial blood will rise (usually above 150 mmHg).
Revised: :141 :141 If the cause of the cyanosis is poor oxygen saturation by the lungs, allowing the patient to breathe 100\% oxygen will augment the lungs' ability to saturate the blood with oxygen, and the partial pressure of oxygen in the arterial blood will rise (usually above 150 mmHg).
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Original: Unless a waiver is granted, the EMA mandates that drug companies prepare Pediatric Investigation Plans (PIPs) and conduct clinical trials that will ensure their products are safe and effective in children.
Revised: Unless a waiver is granted, the European Medicines Agency mandates that drug companies prepare Pediatric Investigation Plans (PIPs) and conduct clinical trials that will ensure their products are safe and effective in children.
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Original:  According  CESP, child-focused forms should include all the elements and considerations generally required for seeking informed consent of competent adults.
Revised:  According to CESP, child-focused forms should include all the elements and considerations generally required for seeking informed consent of competent adults.
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Original:  He obtained a higher diploma in co-operation in Bachelor of Arts (Economics) and started his professional career as a government employee and worked in various departments such as Agriculture, Co-operation, Development etc.
Revised:  He obtained a higher diploma in co-operation and a bachelor's degree in Economics. He started his professional career as a government employee and worked in various departments such as Agriculture, Co-operation, Development etc.
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Original:  Vasu made a mark for himself as a novelist with his Chuvappunada (Redtape, 1966) which brought out the red-tapism of the governmental machinery.
Revised:  Vasu made a mark for himself as a novelist with Chuvappunada (Redtape, 1966) which brought out the red-tapism of the governmental machinery.
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