wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:    Air India Express Boeing 737-800, which had departed from Dubai of the United Arab Emirates  was bound for Mangalore in the southern Indian state of Karnataka.
Revised:  Air India Express Boeing 737-800, which had departed from Dubai of the United Arab Emirates , was bound for Mangalore in the southern Indian state of Karnataka.
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Original:  The airport  which was constructed in 2006  has seen over 32,000 successful landings since opening.
Revised:  The airport , which was constructed in 2006 has seen over 32,000 successful landings since opening.
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Original:  The airport  which was constructed in 2006  has seen over 32,000 successful landings since opening.
Revised:  The airport which was constructed in 2006 , has seen over 32,000 successful landings since opening.
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Original:  However Coke is seen by members ot the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills a role for that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him with their own lives if need be , "...we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator.
Revised:  However Coke is seen by members ot the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills a role that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him with their own lives if need be , "...we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator.
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Original:  However Coke is seen by members ot the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills a role for that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him with their own lives if need be , "...we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator.
Revised:  However Coke is seen by members ot the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills a role for that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him , "...we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator.
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Original:  However Coke is seen by members ot the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills a role that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him, "...we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator.
Revised:  However Coke is seen by members of the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills a role that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him, "...we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator.
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Original:  However Coke is seen by members of the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills a role that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him, "...we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator.
Revised:  However Coke is seen by members of the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills roles that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him, "...we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator.
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Original: A state of emergency has been declared in Kingston, the capital of Jamaica, after gunmen beseiged and fired at police stations, leading to at least two police officers and a civilian being injured and one manbeing killed . Rioters have erected barricades in the city and one police station was set on fire when it was abandoned after officers ran out of bullets .
Revised: A state of emergency has been declared in Kingston, the capital of Jamaica, after gunmen beseiged and fired at police stations, injuring at least two police officers and a civilian being injured and one manbeing killed . Rioters have erected barricades in the city and one police station was set on fire when it was abandoned after officers ran out of bullets .
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Original: A state of emergency has been declared in Kingston, the capital of Jamaica, after gunmen beseiged and fired at police stations, leading to at least two police officers and a civilian being injured and one manbeing killed . Rioters have erected barricades in the city and one police station was set on fire when it was abandoned after officers ran out of bullets .
Revised: A state of emergency has been declared in Kingston, the capital of Jamaica, after gunmen beseiged and fired at police stations, leading to at least two police officers and a civilian being injured and one manbeing killed . Rioters have erected barricades in the city and one police station was set on fire when it was abandoned after officers ran out of ammunition .
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Original:  However Coke is seen by members of the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills roles that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him,  " ... we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator .
Revised:  However Coke is seen by members of the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills roles that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him, one demonstrator stating " ... we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator .
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Original:  However Coke is seen by members of the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills roles that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him,  " ... we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator .
Revised:  However Coke is seen by members of the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills roles that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him, " we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator .
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Original:  However Coke is seen by members of the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills roles that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him,  " ... we are willing to die for Dudus," saying one demonstrator .
Revised:  However Coke is seen by members of the impoverished Tivoli Gardens neighbourhood as a "godfather" like figure, who fulfills roles that the government does not, and his supporters have vowed to protect him, " ... we are willing to die for Dudus," .
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Original:  The Jamaican police accuse the alliance of gunmen from communities across the island state of a desire to " ... launch coordinated attacks on the security forces , " and urged ordinary citizens to evacuate the Tivoli Gardens and Denham Town areas of the city.
Revised:  The Jamaican police accuse the alliance of gunmen from communities across the island state of a desire to " launch coordinated attacks on the security forces , " and urged ordinary citizens to evacuate the Tivoli Gardens and Denham Town areas of the city.
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Original:  The Jamaican police accuse the alliance of gunmen from communities across the island state of a desire to " ... launch coordinated attacks on the security forces , " and urged ordinary citizens to evacuate the Tivoli Gardens and Denham Town areas of the city.
Revised:  The Jamaican police accuse the alliance of gunmen from communities across the island state of a desire to " ... launch coordinated attacks on the security forces " and urged ordinary citizens to evacuate the Tivoli Gardens and Denham Town areas of the city.
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Original:  The Jamaican police accuse the alliance of gunmen from communities across the island state of a desire to " ... launch coordinated attacks on the security forces , " and urged ordinary citizens to evacuate the Tivoli Gardens and Denham Town areas of the city.
Revised:  The Jamaican police accuse the alliance of gunmen from communities across the island state of a desire to " ... launch coordinated attacks on the security forces , " and urged citizens to evacuate the Tivoli Gardens and Denham Town areas of the city.
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Original:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " ... a calculated assault on the authority of the state . " and promised that " The  criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph ...
Revised:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " a calculated assault on the authority of the state . " and promised that " The criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph ...
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Original:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " ... a calculated assault on the authority of the state . " and promised that " The  criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph ...
Revised:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " ... a calculated assault on the authority of the state " and promised that " The criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph ...
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Original:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " ... a calculated assault on the authority of the state . " and promised that " The  criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph ...
Revised:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " ... a calculated assault on the authority of the state . " and promised that " t criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph ...
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Original:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " ... a calculated assault on the authority of the state . " and promised that " The  criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph ...
Revised:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " ... a calculated assault on the authority of the state . " and promised that " The he criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph ...
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Original:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " ... a calculated assault on the authority of the state . " and promised that " The  criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph ...
Revised:  Bruce Golding the Prime Minister called the attacks " ... a calculated assault on the authority of the state . " and promised that " The criminal element who have placed the society under siege will not be allowed to triumph "
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Original: A state of emergency has been declared in Kingston, the capital of Jamaica, after gunmen beseiged and fired at police stations, injuring at least two police officers and a civilian, killing another man.
Revised: A state of emergency has been declared in Kingston, the capital of Jamaica, after gunmen besieged and fired at police stations, injuring at least two police officers and a civilian, killing another man.
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Original:  The violence comes after the Jamaican authorities announced that they would extradite Christopher Dudus Coke, an alledged drug lord, to the United States on drugs and firearms charges.
Revised:  The violence comes after the Jamaican authorities announced that they would extradite Christopher Dudus Coke, an alleged drug lord, to the United States on drugs and firearms charges.
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Original: The first such commemoration was declared 60 years ago today  after Japan unconditionally surrendered following the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki .
Revised: The first such commemoration was declared 60 years ago today , after Japan unconditionally surrendered following the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki .
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Original:  Yesterday, Japanese Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi laid a wreath at the Chidorigafuchi military ceremony and today expressed "deep remorse" and "heartfelt apology" for his country's past colonial rule and military aggression at the national commemoration ceremony.
Revised:  At yesterday Japanese Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi laid a wreath at the Chidorigafuchi military ceremony and today expressed "deep remorse" and "heartfelt apology" for his country's past colonial rule and military aggression at the national commemoration ceremony.
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Original: The national commemoration ceremony this year in Japan was characterised by the absence of any parents of dead soldiers at the first time since 1946.
Revised: The national commemoration ceremony this year in Japan was characterised by the absence of any parents of dead soldiers for the first time since 1946.
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Original:  He later met with veterans of the Far East conflict at a service in the Imperial War Museum in London   .
Revised:  He later met with veterans of the Far East conflict at a service in the Imperial War Museum in London . .
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Original: The first such   commemoration was declared 60 years ago today, after Japan unconditionally surrendered following the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki as VJ Day in the Allies.
Revised: The first such The first commemoration was declared 60 years ago today, after Japan unconditionally surrendered following the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki as VJ Day in the Allies.
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Original:  "We roasted them like marshmellows."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The first commemoration was declared 60 years ago today, after Japan unconditionally surrendered following the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki as VJ Day in the Allies.
Revised:  "We roasted them like marshmellows."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The first such commemoration was declared 60 years ago today, after Japan unconditionally surrendered following the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki as VJ Day in the Allies.
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Original:  A Rossi announcement this Wednesday would cast doubt on the candidacies of the others, which include State Senator Don Benton and former NFL player Clint Didier.
Revised:  A Rossi announcement this Wednesday could cast doubt on the candidacies of the others, which include State Senator Don Benton and former NFL player Clint Didier.
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Original: Former Washington  gubernatorial candidate and state legislator Dino Rossi (R) will announce he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent  Senator Patty Murray (D-WA) on Wednesday.
Revised: Former Washington State gubernatorial candidate and state legislator Dino Rossi (R) will announce he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent Senator Patty Murray (D-WA) on Wednesday.
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Original: Former Washington  gubernatorial candidate and state legislator Dino Rossi (R) will announce he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent  Senator Patty Murray (D-WA) on Wednesday.
Revised: Former Washington gubernatorial candidate and state legislator Republican Dino Rossi will announce he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent Senator Patty Murray (D-WA) on Wednesday.
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Original: Former Washington  gubernatorial candidate and state legislator Dino Rossi (R) will announce he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent  Senator Patty Murray (D-WA) on Wednesday.
Revised: Former Washington gubernatorial candidate and state legislator Dino Rossi (R) will announce he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent Democrat Senator Patty Murray (D-WA) on Wednesday.
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Original: Former Washington  gubernatorial candidate and state legislator Dino Rossi (R) will announce he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent  Senator Patty Murray (D-WA) on Wednesday.
Revised: Former Washington gubernatorial candidate and state legislator Dino Rossi (R) will announce he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent Senator Patty Murray on Wednesday.
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Original:  While Rossi failed twice at winning the governor's office in 2004 and 2008, early polling suggested that he would present a formidable challenge to Senator Murray.
Revised:  While Rossi failed twice at winning the governor's office in 2004 and 2008, early polling suggested that he would present a challenge to Senator Murray.
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Original: While Rossi failed twice at winning the Washington  governor's office in 2004 and 2008, early polling suggested that he would present a challenge to Senator Murray .
Revised: While Rossi failed twice at winning the Washington State governor's office in 2004 and 2008, early polling suggested that he would present a challenge to Senator Murray .
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Original: Former Washington Republican gubernatorial candidate and state legislator Dino Rossi is to announce on Wednesday that he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent Democratic Senator Patty Murray.
Revised: Former Washington Republican state legislator Dino Rossi is to announce on Wednesday that he is running for the U.S. Senate against incumbent Democratic Senator Patty Murray.
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Original:  Abbas also insisted that Israel must hand over control over the West Bank and East Jerusalem aswell in the not so far future.
Revised:  Abbas also insisted that Israel must hand over control over the West Bank and East Jerusalem as well in the not so far future.
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Original:  Many settlers have vowed to resist their evacuation and promised fierce but nonviolent resistance.
Revised: xxxxxxxxxcc Many settlers have vowed to resist their evacuation and promised fierce but nonviolent resistance.
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Original: Under international law, the settlements are illegal as the Strip belongs to Palestine.
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Original:  The Israeli government believe that the withdrawal from the Gaza Strip is vital for the security of the country, although the decision to withdraw was very controversial, causing splits in Sharon's governing Likud party.
Revised:  The Israeli government believes that the withdrawal from the Gaza Strip is vital for the security of the country, although the decision to withdraw was very controversial, causing splits in Sharon's governing Likud party.
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Original: Maj. Gen. Dan Harel, Israel's commander over the Gaza Strip, said the army will not waiver in managing the pullout: "We will reach every settler, just as we have planned."
Revised: Maj. Gen. Dan Harel, Israel's commander over the Gaza Strip, said the army will not waver in managing the pullout: "We will reach every settler, just as we have planned."
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Original:  Sharon also said that if any terrorist attacks by Palestinians were to occur after the pullot his government would deliever the "harshest response ever".
Revised:  Sharon also said that if any terrorist attacks by Palestinians were to occur after the pull-out his government would deliever the "harshest response ever".
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Original: The Gaza Strip has been partially occuppied by Jewish settlers for 38 years.
Revised: The Gaza Strip has been partially occupied by Jewish settlers for 38 years.
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Original:  The Baltimore Orioles went on to lose 7-6 to the Toronto Blue Jays before a Sunday crowd of 30, 954 in Camden Yards . Palmeiro, who went 0 for 4 in four at-bats, had a chance in the bottom of the ninth inning to drive in the winning runs.
Revised:  His first appearance at bat at the Sunday contest in Camden Yards against the Toronto Blue Jays before a Sunday crowd of 30, 954 in Camden Yards . Palmeiro, who went 0 for 4 in four at-bats, had a chance in the bottom of the ninth inning to drive in the winning runs.
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Original:  The Baltimore Orioles went on to lose 7-6 to the Toronto Blue Jays before a Sunday crowd of 30, 954 in Camden Yards . Palmeiro, who went 0 for 4 in four at-bats, had a chance in the bottom of the ninth inning to drive in the winning runs.
Revised:  The Baltimore Orioles went on to lose 7-6 to the Toronto Blue Jays before a crowd of 30, 954 in Camden Yards . Palmeiro, who went 0 for 4 in four at-bats, had a chance in the bottom of the ninth inning to drive in the winning runs.
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Original: With 2-out and 2-men on in scoring position, and chants of " Raffy, Raffy, Raffy " coming from the crowd, Palmeiroflied out to right.
Revised: With 2-out and 2-men on in scoring position, and chants of " Raffy, Raffy, Raffy " 
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Original:  After the ball    was caught by Blue Jay right-fielder Alex Rios, Palmeiro slapped his hands together and walked slowly to the dugout as the gameending out was no personal triumph, and certainly a disappointment for Orioles fans .  "I just wanted to get a hit ," Palmeiro told reporters.
Revised:  After the ball was caught by Blue Jay right-fielder Alex Rios, thus ending the game, making it the Blue Jays' fifth win in six games . "I just wanted to get a hit ," Palmeiro told reporters.
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Original:  After the ball    was caught by Blue Jay right-fielder Alex Rios, Palmeiro slapped his hands together and walked slowly to the dugout as the gameending out was no personal triumph, and certainly a disappointment for Orioles fans .  "I just wanted to get a hit ," Palmeiro told reporters.
Revised:  After the ball was caught by Blue Jay right-fielder Alex Rios, Palmeiro slapped his hands together and walked slowly to the dugout as the gameending out was no personal triumph, and certainly a disappointment for Orioles fans . Afterwards, Mr. Palmeiro told reporters, "I just wanted to get a hit ," Palmeiro told reporters.
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Original:  Orioles coach Sam Perlozzo said , "I'm sure it's a relief to get it out of the way ," of Palmeiro's appearance.
Revised:  Coach Perlozzo commented about Mr. Palmeiro's appearance saying , "I'm sure it's a relief to get it out of the way ," of Palmeiro's appearance.
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Original:  Orioles interim manager Sam Perlozzo had Mr. Palmeiro wait three days in the dugout after his suspension before placing him in the Sunday play lineup.
Revised:  Orioles interim manager Sam Perlozzo had Mr. Palmeiro wait three days in the dugout after his suspension before placing him in the play lineup.
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Original: The advertisement, which premiered on January 12, 2010 and has since been withdrawn from use, attacked gubernatorial candidate Marco Rubio over reversals in Rubio's public positions.
Revised: The advertisement, which premiered on January 12, 2010 and has since been withdrawn from use, attacked politician Marco Rubio over reversals in Rubio's public positions.
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Original: After   the announcement of his death, the Ukrainian basketball federation released a statement saying that “On behalf of all fans, we want to express our deep condolences to the families and friends of the deceased.
Revised: After After the announcement of his death, the Ukrainian basketball federation released a statement saying that “On behalf of all fans, we want to express our deep condolences to the families and friends of the deceased.
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Original:  The death was announced Ukraine’ s basketball federation.
Revised:  The death was announced by Ukraine' s basketball federation.
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Original:  He won gold in  1979, 1981 and 1985 European championship and gold in the 1982 FIBA World Championship.
Revised:  He won gold in the 1979, 1981 and 1985 European championship and gold in the 1982 FIBA World Championship.
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Original:  He won gold in  1979, 1981 and 1985 European championship and gold in the 1982 FIBA World Championship.
Revised:  He won gold in 1979, 1981 and 1985 European championships and gold in the 1982 FIBA World Championship.
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Original:  He also won two Olympic medals , a bronze in 1980 and a gold in 1988.
Revised:  His two Olympic medals , a bronze in 1980 and a gold in 1988.
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Original:  He also won two Olympic medals , a bronze in 1980 and a gold in 1988.
Revised:  He also won two Olympic medals were a bronze in 1980 and a gold in 1988.
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