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Original:  The spokesperson for his family said that he "had not been very well  " recently but refused to give out details of the nature of his illness .
Revised:  The spokesperson for his family said that he "had not been very well " but did not state his illness or cause of death .
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Original:  His other works include his screenwriting debut, Whistle Down the Wind in 1961.
Revised:  His other works include his screen-writing debut, Whistle Down the Wind in 1961.
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Original:  Some of his well known plays included  Mrs Nobody and Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell which debuted in 1989 on the West End in London.
Revised:  Some of his well known plays included Mr and Mrs Nobody and Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell which debuted in 1989 on the West End in London.
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Original:  " Bridges and dams have been destroyed, the main hospital in Ouagadougou which is close to a dam was inundated and some patients including about 60 children were evacuated ," said the Belgian Red Cross' Rosine Jourdain.
Revised: The Belgian Red Cross' Rosine Jourdain said that " Bridges and dams have been destroyed, the main hospital in Ouagadougou which is close to a dam was inundated and some patients including about 60 children were evacuated ," said the Belgian Red Cross' Rosine Jourdain.
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Original:  " Bridges and dams have been destroyed, the main hospital in Ouagadougou which is close to a dam was inundated and some patients including about 60 children were evacuated ," said the Belgian Red Cross' Rosine Jourdain.
Revised:  " bridges and dams have been destroyed, the main hospital in Ouagadougou which is close to a dam was inundated and some patients including about 60 children were evacuated ," said the Belgian Red Cross' Rosine Jourdain.
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Original:  " An electrical plant was also destroyed  so I think we are going to have some power supply problems."
Revised:  " An electrical plant was also destroyed , so I think we are going to have some power supply problems."
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Original:  The jury could not reach the unanimous verdict required for the death penalty    
Revised:  The jury could not reach the unanimous verdict required for the death penalty . 
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Original: It took months for the offences to be discovered, even though Green  quickly confessed to a seargent.
Revised: It took months for the offences to be discovered, even though Green had quickly confessed to a seargent.
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Original:  The jury could not reach the unanimous verdict required for the death penalty  .
Revised:  The jury failed to reach theunanimous verdict required for the death penalty .
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Original:  They walked to her house while disguised as insurgents and sepearated her from her parents and younger sister.
Revised:  They walked to her house while disguised as insurgents and separated her from her parents and younger sister.
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Original:  A US civilian court tried him, the first such prosecution of a soldier under a law allowing servicemen to be charged with crimes  abroad.
Revised:  A US civilian court tried him, the first such prosecution of a soldier under a law allowing servicemen to be charged with crimes carried out abroad.
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Original:  The judge described his actions as "unimaginable, unjustified and inexcusable" and sentenced him to five  life sentences without  parole.
Revised:  The judge described his actions as "unimaginable, unjustified and inexcusable" and sentenced him to five life sentences without possibility of parole.
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Original:  Green said he was acting upon orders  former Specialist Paul Cortez, another of the attackers, and told the court "Y'all can act like I'm a psychopath or a sexual predator or whatever.
Revised:  Green said he was acting upon orders from former Specialist Paul Cortez, another of the attackers, and told the court "Y'all can act like I'm a psychopath or a sexual predator or whatever.
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Original:  He then raped her himself while she wept before covering her face with a pillow and shooting her dead .
Revised:  He then raped her himself while she wept before covering her face with a pillow and fatally shooting her .
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Original:  Big Brother will get back to you…  
Revised:  Big Brother will get back to you… " 
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Original: Glamour model Sophie Reade has won the tenth series of  British version of reality TV show Big Brother.
Revised: Glamour model Sophie Reade has won the tenth series of the British version of reality TV show Big Brother.
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Original:  The British public earlier phoned in and voted David Ramsden third, Charlie Drummond fourth  and Rodrigo Lopes fifth.
Revised:  The British public earlier phoned in and voted David Ramsden third, Charlie Drummond fourth , and Rodrigo Lopes fifth.
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Original:   Channel 4's Director of Television Kevin Lygo said that Big Brother "had been on for far too long" and that the show "had reached a natural end point on Channel 4 and that itwas time to move on".
Revised:  Kevin Lygo, Channel 4's Director of Television Kevin Lygo said that Big Brother "had been on for far too long" and that the show "had reached a natural end point on Channel 4 and that itwas time to move on".
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Original:   Channel 4's Director of Television Kevin Lygo said that Big Brother "had been on for far too long" and that the show "had reached a natural end point on Channel 4 and that itwas time to move on".
Revised:  Channel 4's Director of Television , said that Big Brother "had been on for far too long" and that the show "had reached a natural end point on Channel 4 and that itwas time to move on".
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Original:   Channel 4's Director of Television Kevin Lygo said that Big Brother "had been on for far too long" and that the show "had reached a natural end point on Channel 4 and that itwas time to move on".
Revised:  Channel 4's Director of Television Kevin Lygo said that Big Brother "had reached a natural end point on Channel 4 and that itwas time to move on".
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Original:   Channel 4's Director of Television Kevin Lygo said that Big Brother "had been on for far too long" and that the show "had reached a natural end point on Channel 4 and that itwas time to move on".
Revised:  Channel 4's Director of Television Kevin Lygo said that Big Brother "had been on for far too long" and that the show "had reached a natural end point on Channel 4 and it's time to move on".
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Original:  As for 2011 - stay tuned.
Revised:  As for 2011 , stay tuned.
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Original:  If the charges are upheld, the punishements could include a fine, exclusion from races or complete disqualification from the current championship   
Revised:  If the charges are upheld, the punishements could include a fine, exclusion from races or complete disqualification from the current championship . 
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Original:  The team succeded in appealing this  
Revised:  The team succeded in appealing this . 
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Original:  Fellow Renault driver Nelson Piquet jr . then crashed, causing a safety car to come out.
Revised:  Fellow Renault driver Nelson Piquet Jr . then crashed, causing a safety car to come out.
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Original:  If the charges are upheld, the punishements could include a fine, exclusion from races or complete disqualification from the current championship.
Revised:  If the charges are upheld, the punishmements could include a fine, exclusion from races or complete disqualification from the current championship.
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Original:  The team succeded in appealing this.
Revised:  The team succeeded in appealing this.
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Original:  If the charges are upheld, the punishmements could include a fine, exclusion from races or complete disqualification from the current championship.
Revised:  If the charges are upheld, the punishments could include a fine, exclusion from races or complete disqualification from the current championship.
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Original: The north-east of Scotland got flooded after an unexpected torrential downpour on Friday.
Revised: The north-east 
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Original:  A major clean-up operation has commenced since over 500 homes had to be evacuated in Moray due to the River Spey and River Lossie flooding . 400 homes were also evacuated in the Elgin area and 50 more in Fochabers.
Revised:  Over 500 homes had to be evacuated in Moray due to the River Spey and River Lossie flooding . 400 homes were also evacuated in the Elgin area and 50 more in Fochabers.
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Original:  A major clean-up operation has commenced since over 500 homes had to be evacuated in Moray due to the River Spey and River Lossie flooding . 400 homes were also evacuated in the Elgin area and 50 more in Fochabers.
Revised:  A major clean-up operation has commenced since over 500 homes had to be evacuated in Moray after the River Spey and River Lossie flooding . 400 homes were also evacuated in the Elgin area and 50 more in Fochabers.
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Original:  The advice from Grampian Police and Tayside Police had advised people not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary  while the Northern Constabulary advised motorists to drive with care.
Revised:  The Grampian Police and Tayside Police had advised people not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary while the Northern Constabulary advised motorists to drive with care.
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Original:  The advice from Grampian Police and Tayside Police had advised people not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary  while the Northern Constabulary advised motorists to drive with care.
Revised:  The advice from Grampian Police and Tayside Police advise residents not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary while the Northern Constabulary advised motorists to drive with care.
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Original:  The advice from Grampian Police and Tayside Police had advised people not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary  while the Northern Constabulary advised motorists to drive with care.
Revised:  The advice from Grampian Police and Tayside Police had advised people not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary , while the Northern Constabulary advised motorists to drive with care.
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Original:  In some places, a month's worth of rain had poured down in just 24 hours.
Revised:  In some places, a month's worth of rain fallen in just 24 hours.
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Original:  About 67 millimetres of rain had fallen in Aberdeen - roughly the equivalent of a month of rain on average .
Revised:  About 67 millimetres of rain had fallen in Aberdeen - roughly the equivalent of an average month of rainfall .
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Original:  In Lossiemouth, the rainfall was 76.4 millimetres - 15mm more than the average amount every month - to 0900 BST.
Revised:  In Lossiemouth, the rainfall was 76.4 millimetres - 15mm more than the average amount every month .
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Original:   Chief executive of Moray Council Alistair Keddie said : "Everything possible was done to protect residents."
Revised:  Chief executive of Moray Council Alistair Keddie said , "Everything possible was done to protect residents."
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Original:  62-year-old Mary Campbell from Fochabers said : “ I was calling from 8pm but no-one showed up until about midnight.
Revised:  62-year-old Mary Campbell from Fochabers said , " I was calling from 8pm but no-one showed up until about midnight.
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Original:  ” And 53-year-old industrial painter Ian Gordon wasn't happy either.
Revised:  " 53-year-old industrial painter Ian Gordon wasn't happy either.
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Original:  He commented : “ The bottom of my house is completely covered.
Revised:  He commented saying, " The bottom of my house is completely covered.
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Original:  ” The MSP for Moray Angus Robertson MP stated : "Water levels are higher than I have ever seen them before and communities have rallied to support people whose homes and businesses have been flooded.
Revised:  " The MSP for Moray Angus Robertson MP stated : "Water levels are higher than I have ever seen them before and communities have rallied to support people whose homes and businesses have been flooded.
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Original:  ” The MSP for Moray Angus Robertson MP stated : "Water levels are higher than I have ever seen them before and communities have rallied to support people whose homes and businesses have been flooded.
Revised:  ” The MSP for Moray Angus Robertson MP stated , "Water levels are higher than I have ever seen them before and communities have rallied to support people whose homes and businesses have been flooded.
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Original: The Grampian Police and Tayside Police advise residents not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary , while the Northern Constabulary advised motorists to drive with care.
Revised: The Grampian Police and Tayside Police advise residents not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary . The Northern Constabulary advised motorists to drive with care.
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Original: The Grampian Police and Tayside Police advise residents not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary , while the Northern Constabulary advised motorists to drive with care.
Revised: The Grampian Police and Tayside Police advise residents not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary , while the Northern Constabulary advised residents to travel with caution.
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Original:  62-year-old Mary Campbell from Fochabers said , "I was calling  from 8pm but no-one showed up until about midnight.
Revised:  Mary Campbell, 62 from Fochabers said , "I was calling from 8pm but no-one showed up until about midnight.
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Original:  62-year-old Mary Campbell from Fochabers said , "I was calling  from 8pm but no-one showed up until about midnight.
Revised:  62-year-old Mary Campbell from Fochabers said , "I was calling for help from 8pm but no-one showed up until about midnight.
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Original:  Other areas affected included Aberdeen, Dyce, Lossiemouth and Rothes, were 25 homes had to be evacuated.
Revised:  Other areas affected included Aberdeen, Dyce, Lossiemouth and Rothes, where 25 homes had to be evacuated.
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Original:  The Grampian Police and Tayside Police advise residents not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary.
Revised:  The Grampian Police and Tayside Police advised residents not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary.
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Original:  The Grampian Police and Tayside Police advise residents not to drive unless it was absolutely necessary.
Revised:  The Grampian Police and Tayside Police advise residents not to drive unless absolutely necessary.
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Original:  In some places, a month's worth of rain  fallen in just 24 hours.
Revised:  In some places, a month's worth of rain had fallen in just 24 hours.
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Original:  However, some residents of the local areas were not so certain.
Revised:  However, some residents of the local areas are not so certain.
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Original:  In the email, the company's chief executive, Jeff Bezos apologised again, and described the earlier actions as "stupid, thoughtless and painfully out of line with our principles."
Revised:  In the email, the company's chief executive, Jeff Bezos apologized again, and described the earlier actions as "stupid, thoughtless and painfully out of line with our principles."
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Original:  In the email, the company's chief executive, Jeff Bezos apologized again, and described the earlier actions as "stupid, thoughtless and painfully out of line with our principles."
Revised:  In the email, the company's chief executive, Jeff Bezos apologised again, and described the earlier actions as "stupid, thoughtless and painfully out of line with our principles."
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Original:  Other specifications include the ability to launch unmanned submarines and scientific gliders, devices towed behind ships to gather data, as well as power through 2m (6.6ft) thick ice at three knots  
Revised:  Other specifications include the ability to launch unmanned submarines and scientific gliders, devices towed behind ships to gather data, as well as power through 2m (6.6ft) thick ice at three knots . 
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Original:  The announcements come shortly after Nerc completed upgrades to ocean-going 'bluewater' ships and . "The new vessel will make Nerc's entire fleet, ton for ton, the most advanced scientific fleet in the world" according to Nerc head Prof Duncan Wingham, speaking to the BBC
Revised:  The announcements come shortly after Nerc completed upgrades to ocean-going 'bluewater' ships and . "The new vessel will make Nerc's entire fleet, ton for ton, the most advanced scientific fleet in the world" according to Nerc head Professor Duncan Wingham, speaking to the BBC
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Original:  Funding body  (Nerc) says the current ships, and , are to carry on operating at least until 2020.
Revised:  Funding body the (Nerc) says the current ships, and , are to carry on operating at least until 2020.
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Original:  The terrible incident which occurred at 0200 BST on Saturday happened in a three-storey block of apartments in Buckrose Court near Malton, North Yorkshire, England.
Revised:  At 0200 BST on Saturday happened in a three-storey block of apartments in Buckrose Court near Malton, North Yorkshire, England.
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Original:  The two jockeys have been identified as Jamie Kyne, who was only 18  and Jan Wilson, who was just 19.
Revised:  The two jockeys have been identified as Jamie Kyne, who was only 18 , and Jan Wilson, who was just 19.
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Original:  Kyne was due to ride at Haydock on Saturday afternoon, while Wilson was due to ride at Thirsk on the same day, while riding her mother's horse, Imperial Sword - and so both were staying in the apartment as a means of accomodation, as Jamie came from Ireland and Jan was from Forfar, Scotland.
Revised:  Kyne was due to ride at Haydock on Saturday afternoon, while Wilson was due to ride at Thirsk on the same day, while riding her mother's horse, Imperial Sword — and so both were staying in the apartment as a means of accomodation, as Jamie came from Ireland and Jan was from Forfar, Scotland.
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Original:  Kyne's aunt said: "The family are devastated and Jamie was a star .
Revised:  "The family are devastated and Jamie was a star .
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Original:  Kyne's aunt said: "The family are devastated and Jamie was a star .
Revised:  Kyne's aunt said: "The family are devastated and Jamie was a star ," Kyne's aunt said. "
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Original: Frankurt. After troumendous 4:1 victory over Argetina, Brasil won this year's Confederations Cup.
Revised:  After troumendous 4:1 victory over Argetina, Brasil won this year's Confederations Cup.
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Original: After troumendous 4:1 victory over Argetina, Brasil won this year's Confederations Cup.
Revised: After troumendous 4:1 victory over Argetina, Brazil won this year's Confederations Cup.
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Original:  In 12nd minute Adriano dribbled past some opponents and scored a great goal from over eighteen meters.
Revised:  In 12th minute Adriano dribbled past some opponents and scored a great goal from over eighteen meters.
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Original:  Brasil 's first matches at the Confederations Cup were poor.
Revised:  Brazil 's first matches at the Confederations Cup were poor.
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Original:  Brasil : Dida - Lucio, Roque Junior, Cicinho (replaced by Maicon in 86th minute), Gilberto - Kaka (Renato, 86th), Emerson, Ze Roberto, Ronaldinho - Adriano, Robinho (Juninho, 90th) Argentina: Lux - Zanetti, Coloccini, Heinze, Placente - Cambiasso (Aimar, 56th), Bernardi, Riquelme, Sorin - Figueroa (Tevez, 72nd), Delgado (Galletti, 81st
Revised:  Brazil : Dida - Lucio, Roque Junior, Cicinho (replaced by Maicon in 86th minute), Gilberto - Kaka (Renato, 86th), Emerson, Ze Roberto, Ronaldinho - Adriano, Robinho (Juninho, 90th) Argentina: Lux - Zanetti, Coloccini, Heinze, Placente - Cambiasso (Aimar, 56th), Bernardi, Riquelme, Sorin - Figueroa (Tevez, 72nd), Delgado (Galletti, 81st
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Original: After troumendous 4:1 victory over Argetina, Brazil won this year's Confederations Cup.
Revised: After 4:1 victory over Argetina, Brazil won this year's Confederations Cup.
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Original:  The match took place in Frankfurt, Germany, in a very bad weather condition .
Revised:  The match took place in Frankfurt, Germany, in very bad weather condition .
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Original:  The match took place in Frankfurt, Germany, in a very bad weather condition .
Revised:  The match took place in Frankfurt, Germany, in a very bad weather conditions .
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Original:  Lux have no chances .
Revised:  Lux had no chance .
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Original:  Four minutes later Kaká scored  next goal with another powerful long shot from the outer of  penalty area.
Revised:  Four minutes later Kaká scored the next goal with another powerful long shot from the outer of penalty area.
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Original:  Four minutes later Kaká scored  next goal with another powerful long shot from the outer of  penalty area.
Revised:  Four minutes later Kaká scored next goal with another powerful long shot from the outer of the penalty area.
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Original:  After that,  Argentinians seemed as if they lost belief in positive outcome, but they were determined to change the situation.
Revised:  After that, the Argentinians seemed as if they lost belief in positive outcome, but they were determined to change the situation.
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Original:  Riquelme, Sorin, Placente and others were trying to score a goal, but they were unable to do that . Brazil's first matches at the Confederations Cup were poor.
Revised:  Riquelme, Sorin, Placente and others were trying to score a goal, but were unable to do that . Brazil's first matches at the Confederations Cup were poor.
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Original:  Riquelme, Sorin, Placente and others were trying to score a goal, but they were unable to do that . Brazil's first matches at the Confederations Cup were poor.
Revised:  Riquelme, Sorin, Placente and others were trying to score a goal, but they were unable to do get one past the posts . Brazil's first matches at the Confederations Cup were poor.
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Original:  Their draw with Japan, and loose to Mexico, have made their supoorters unhappy.
Revised:  Their draw with Japan, and loss to Mexico, have made their supoorters unhappy.
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Original:  Their draw with Japan, and loose to Mexico, have made their supoorters unhappy.
Revised:  Their draw with Japan, and loose to Mexico, made their supporters unhappy.
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Original:  But Carlos Alberto Parreira had led the team to the top of competitions, which is considered as the preparation for the World Cup.
Revised:  But Carlos Alberto Parreira led the team to the top of competitions, which is considered as the preparation for the World Cup.
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Original:  But Carlos Alberto Parreira had led the team to the top of competitions, which is considered as the preparation for the World Cup.
Revised:  But Carlos Alberto Parreira had led the team to the top of competitions, which is considered a preparation for the World Cup.
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Original:  He's not going to shoot up the whole school," said Jones in 2005 
Revised:  He's not going to shoot up the whole school," said Jones in 2005. 
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