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Original: Selective pulmonary angiogram revealing significant thrombus (labelled A) causing a central obstruction in the left main pulmonary artery Pulmonary angiography (or pulmonary arteriography) is an Interventional Radiology procedure . Pulmonary blood vessels are x-rayed to detect arteriovenous malformations . Direct angiography is the injection of radiocontrast into the circulation with subsequent fluoroscopy (direct X-ray visualisation) of the lungs.
Revised: Selective pulmonary angiogram revealing significant thrombus (labelled A) causing a central obstruction in the left main pulmonary artery Pulmonary angiography (or pulmonary arteriography) is medical procedure used to visualize the pulmonary arteries and much less frequently, the pulmonary veins . Direct angiography is the injection of radiocontrast into the circulation with subsequent fluoroscopy (direct X-ray visualisation) of the lungs.
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Original:  CT (computed tomography) angiography has nearly entirely replaced conventional pulmonary angiography in common practice as it is less invasive, faster,  and provides most of the same diagnostic information with the added benefit of visualizing the lung tissue as well as other structures  .
Revised:  CT (computed tomography) angiography has nearly entirely replaced conventional pulmonary angiography in common practice as it is less invasive, faster, safer, and provides most of the same diagnostic information with the added benefit of visualizing the lung tissue as well as other structures .
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Original: Conventional pulmonary angiography is a minimally invasive procedure performed most frequently by an Interventional Radiologist or Interventional Cardiologist .
Revised: Conventional pulmonary angiography is a minimally invasive procedure performed most frequently by an interventional radiologist or interventional cardiologist .
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Original:   Conventional pulmonary angiography was first performed in 1931 by Portuguese angiography pioneers Lopo de Carvalho, Egas Moniz and colleagues.
Revised:  History Conventional pulmonary angiography was first performed in 1931 by Portuguese angiography pioneers Lopo de Carvalho, Egas Moniz and colleagues.
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Original: CT (computed tomography) angiography has nearly entirely replaced conventional pulmonary angiography in common practice as it is less invasive, faster, safer, and provides most of the same diagnostic information with the added benefit of visualizing the lung tissue as well as other structures.
Revised: CT pulmonary angiography has nearly entirely replaced conventional pulmonary angiography in common practice as it is less invasive, faster, safer, and provides most of the same diagnostic information with the added benefit of visualizing the lung tissue as well as other structures.
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Original:  Oozes are also useful in determining the historical abundances of siliceous organisms. 11
Revised:  Oozes are also useful in determining the historical abundances of siliceous organisms. 
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Original:  Marine chert formation Opal burial rate is a function of the dissolution rate and accumulation rate of opal silica on the seafloor.
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Original:  Geographic locations Siliceous oozes form in upwelling areas that provide valuable nutrients for the growth of siliceous organisms living in oceanic surface waters.
Revised:  Siliceous oozes form in upwelling areas that provide valuable nutrients for the growth of siliceous organisms living in oceanic surface waters.
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Original: Role in the oceanic silica cycle  Iron fertilization experiments File:Phytoplankton bloom off Argentina - November 9, 2013.jpg|Diatom bloom in the South Atlantic Ocean, off the coast of Argentina.
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Original:  Diatom evolution marks a time in Earth's geologic history of significant removal of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere while simultaneously increasing atmospheric oxygen levels . Sediment cores, like these from the South Atlantic, allow paleoceanographers to handle and study paleo-oozes .
Revised:  Diatom evolution marks a time in Earth's geologic history of significant removal of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere while simultaneously increasing atmospheric oxygen levels .
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Original: COBIT 5 , released in 2012 bases on COBIT 4.1, Val IT 2.0 and Risk IT frameworks  and draws on ISACA's IT Assurance Framework (ITAF) and the Business Model for Information Security (BMIS).
Revised: COBIT 5 ( 2012 bases on COBIT 4.1, Val IT 2.0 and Risk IT frameworks and draws on ISACA's IT Assurance Framework (ITAF) and the Business Model for Information Security (BMIS).
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Original: COBIT 5 , released in 2012 bases on COBIT 4.1, Val IT 2.0 and Risk IT frameworks  and draws on ISACA's IT Assurance Framework (ITAF) and the Business Model for Information Security (BMIS).
Revised: COBIT 5 , released in 2012 ) is based on COBIT 4.1, Val IT 2.0 and Risk IT frameworks and draws on ISACA's IT Assurance Framework (ITAF) and the Business Model for Information Security (BMIS).
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Original: COBIT 5 , released in 2012 bases on COBIT 4.1, Val IT 2.0 and Risk IT frameworks  and draws on ISACA's IT Assurance Framework (ITAF) and the Business Model for Information Security (BMIS).
Revised: COBIT 5 , released in 2012 bases on COBIT 4.1, Val IT 2.0 and Risk IT frameworks , and draws on ISACA's IT Assurance Framework (ITAF) and the Business Model for Information Security (BMIS).
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Original: See also False positives and false negatives Designed experiment Experiment Controlling for a variable James Lind cured scurvy using a controlled experiment that has been described as the first clinical trial.
Revised: See also False positives and false negatives Designed experiment Controlling for a variable James Lind cured scurvy using a controlled experiment that has been described as the first clinical trial.
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Original:  If there are differences between the fertilized treatment and the unfertilized treatment, these differences may be due to the fertilizer as long as there weren't other confounding factors which affected the result.
Revised:  If there are differences between the fertilized treatment and the unfertilized treatment, these differences may be due to the fertilizer as long as there weren't other confounding factors that affected the result.
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Original:  For example, if a researcher feeds an experimental artificial sweetener to sixty laboratory rats and observes that ten of them subsequently become sick, the underlying cause could be the sweetener itself or something unrelated.
Revised:  For example, if a researcher feeds an experimental artificial sweetener to sixty laboratories rats and observes that ten of them subsequently become sick, the underlying cause could be the sweetener itself or something unrelated.
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Original:  For instance, the artificial sweetener might be mixed with a dilutant and it might be the dilutant which causes the effect.
Revised:  For instance, the artificial sweetener might be mixed with a dilutant and it might be the dilutant that causes the effect.
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Original:  once with the artificial sweetener in the dilutant, and another done exactly the same way , but using the dilutant alone.
Revised:  once with the artificial sweetener in the dilutant, and another done exactly the same way but using the dilutant alone.
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Original:  Now the experiment is controlled for the dilutant and the experimenter can distinguish between sweetener, dilutant  and non-treatment.
Revised:  Now the experiment is controlled for the dilutant and the experimenter can distinguish between sweetener, dilutant , and non-treatment.
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Original:  The simplest solution is to have a treatment where a tractor is driven over plots without spreading fertilizer and in that way  the effects of tractor traffic are controlled.
Revised:  The simplest solution is to have a treatment where a tractor is driven over plots without spreading fertilizer and in that way , the effects of tractor traffic are controlled.
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Original:  Some improvement is expected in the placebo group due to the placebo effect, and this result sets the baseline  which the treatment must improve upon.
Revised:  Some improvement is expected in the placebo group due to the placebo effect, and this result sets the baseline upon which the treatment must improve upon.
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Original:  For example, to assess a new test's ability to detect a disease ( its sensitivity), then we can compare it against a different test that is already known to work.
Revised:  For example, to assess a new test's ability to detect a disease ( it's sensitivity), then we can compare it against a different test that is already known to work.
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Original:  The well-established test is the positive control , since we already know that the answer to the question (whether the test works) is yes.
Revised:  The well-established test is a positive control since we already know that the answer to the question (whether the test works) is yes.
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Original:  For example, if the well-established disease test was determined to have the same effectiveness as found by previous experimenters, this indicates that the experiment is being performed in the same way that the previous experimenters did.
Revised:  For example, if the well-established disease test was determined to have the same effect as found by previous experimenters, this indicates that the experiment is being performed in the same way that the previous experimenters did.
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Original:  Blinding is the practice of withholding information which may bias an experiment.
Revised:  Blinding is the practice of withholding information that may bias an experiment.
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Original:  Unblinding is common in blind experiments , and must be measured and reported.
Revised:  Unblinding is common in blind experiments and must be measured and reported.
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Original: For example, ur stupid and retarded and gay if a researcher feeds an experimental artificial sweetener to sixty laboratories rats and observes that ten of them subsequently become sick, the underlying cause could be the sweetener itself or something unrelated.
Revised: For example, if a researcher feeds an experimental artificial sweetener to sixty laboratories rats and observes that ten of them subsequently become sick, the underlying cause could be the sweetener itself or something unrelated.
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Original:  Argitek en skrywersvriend, Protea Boekhuis, 2006 Eugène N. Marais, Die siel van die mier, Protea Boekhuis, 2007 Leroux: 'n Lewe, Protea Boekhuis, 2008 Briewe van Peter Blum, (Geredigeer en ingelei deur J C Kannemeyer), 2009 Category:Afrikaans-language writers Category:South African writers Category:2011 deaths Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:1939 birt
Revised:  Argitek en skrywersvriend, Protea Boekhuis, 2006 Eugène N. Marais, Die siel van die mier, Protea Boekhuis, 2007 Leroux: 'n Lewe, Protea Boekhuis, 2008 Briewe van Peter Blum, (Geredigeer en ingelei deur J C Kannemeyer), 2009 Category:Afrikaans-language writers Category:South African writers Category:2011 deaths Category:1939 birt
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Original:  J. C. Kannemeyer (31 March 1939 – 25 December 2011) was an authority on Afrikaans literature and a well-known biographer of Afrikaans writers, and published numerous books on the history of Afrikaans literature.
Revised: John Christoffel Kannemeyer, better known as J. C. Kannemeyer (31 March 1939 – 25 December 2011) was an authority on Afrikaans literature and a well-known biographer of Afrikaans writers, and published numerous books on the history of Afrikaans literature.
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Original: Biography at stellenboschwriters. comLitNet Notes and references
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Original: Biography at stellenboschwriters. comLitNet Notes and references
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Original: Biography at stellenboschwriters. comBabelguides listing
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Original: Prince du sang as a rank In France, the rank of prince du sang was the highest held at court after the immediate family of the king during the ancien régime and the Bourbon Restoration.
Revised: As a rank In France, the rank of prince du sang was the highest held at court after the immediate family of the king during the ancien régime and the Bourbon Restoration.
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Original:  Roger, abbé de Courtenay, was the last male of the family, dying on 5 May 1733, and his sister Hélène de Courtenay, marquise de Bauffremont ( 1689-20 June 1768), obtained no redress when she appealed to the king in 1737 after the Parlement of Paris ordered the term "princesse du sang royal de France" deleted from court documents.
Revised:  Roger, abbé de Courtenay, was the last male of the family, dying on 5 May 1733, and his sister Hélène de Courtenay, marquise de Bauffremont ( 1689–20 June 1768), obtained no redress when she appealed to the king in 1737 after the Parlement of Paris ordered the term "princesse du sang royal de France" deleted from court documents.
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Original: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990 (1990 Democratic Revolution, , Ardchilsan Khuvĭsgal ) was a peaceful democratic revolution that started with demonstrations and hunger strikes to overthrow the Mongolian People's Republic and eventually moved towards the democratic present day Mongolia and the writing of the new constitution.
Revised: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990 (1990 Democratic Revolution, , Ardchilsan Khuv'sgal ) was a peaceful democratic revolution that started with demonstrations and hunger strikes to overthrow the Mongolian People's Republic and eventually moved towards the democratic present day Mongolia and the writing of the new constitution.
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Original: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990 ( 1990 Democratic Revolution  , , Ardchilsan Khuv'sgal) was a peaceful democratic revolution that started with demonstrations and hunger strikes to overthrow the Mongolian People's Republic and eventually moved towards the democratic present day Mongolia and the writing of the new constitution .
Revised: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990 , known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution , , Ardchilsan Khuv'sgal) was a peaceful democratic revolution that started with demonstrations and hunger strikes to overthrow the Mongolian People's Republic and eventually moved towards the democratic present day Mongolia and the writing of the new constitution .
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Original: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990 ( 1990 Democratic Revolution  , , Ardchilsan Khuv'sgal) was a peaceful democratic revolution that started with demonstrations and hunger strikes to overthrow the Mongolian People's Republic and eventually moved towards the democratic present day Mongolia and the writing of the new constitution .
Revised: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990 ( 1990 Democratic Revolution , was a peaceful democratic revolution that started with demonstrations and hunger strikes to overthrow the Mongolian People's Republic and eventually moved towards the democratic present day Mongolia and the writing of the new constitution .
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Original: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990 ( 1990 Democratic Revolution  , , Ardchilsan Khuv'sgal) was a peaceful democratic revolution that started with demonstrations and hunger strikes to overthrow the Mongolian People's Republic and eventually moved towards the democratic present day Mongolia and the writing of the new constitution .
Revised: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990 ( 1990 Democratic Revolution , , Ardchilsan Khuv'sgal) was a peaceful democratic revolution that started with demonstrations and hunger strikes to overthrow the Mongolian People's Republic .
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Original: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which eventually led to a transition to a multi-party system, the adoption of a new constitution, and the collapse of the Mongolian People's Republic .
Revised: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which eventually led to the country's transition to a multi-party system, the adoption of a new constitution, and the collapse of the Mongolian People's Republic .
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Original: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which eventually led to a transition to a multi-party system, the adoption of a new constitution, and the collapse of the Mongolian People's Republic .
Revised: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which eventually led to a transition to a multi-party system, adoption of a new constitution, and the collapse of the Mongolian People's Republic .
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Original: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which eventually led to a transition to a multi-party system, the adoption of a new constitution, and the collapse of the Mongolian People's Republic .
Revised: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which eventually led to a transition to a multi-party system, the adoption of a new constitution, and end of communist rule .
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Original: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which eventually led to the country's transition to a multi-party system , adoption of a new constitution, and end of communist rule .
Revised: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which eventually led to the country's transition to a multi-party system .
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Original:  It was spearheaded by mostly younger people demonstrating on Sükhbaatar Square  in the capital Ulaanbaatar.
Revised:  It was led mostly by young demonstrators who rallied at Sükhbaatar Square in the capital Ulaanbaatar.
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Original:  It was spearheaded by mostly younger people demonstrating on Sükhbaatar Square  in the capital Ulaanbaatar.
Revised:  It was spearheaded by mostly younger people demonstrating on Sükhbaatar Square , in the capital Ulaanbaatar.
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Original:  Some of the main organizers were Davaadorjiin Ganbold, Tsakhiagiin Elbegdorj, Sanjaasürengiin Zorig, Erdeniin Bat-Üül, Bat-Erdeniin Batbayar, and Dogmidiin Sosorbaram.
Revised:  The main organisers included Davaadorjiin Ganbold, Tsakhiagiin Elbegdorj, Sanjaasürengiin Zorig, Erdeniin Bat-Üül, Bat-Erdeniin Batbayar, and Dogmidiin Sosorbaram.
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Original:  Although a multi-party system was established , the Mongolian People's Revolutionary Party (MPRP) actually remained in power until 1996.
Revised:  Although a multi-party system was established , the Mongolian People's Revolutionary Party (MPRP) remained in power until 1996.
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Original: Nonetheless, the new MPRP government under D. Byambasüren shared power with the democrats, and implemented constitutional and economic reforms.
Revised: Nonetheless, the new MPRP government under Dashiin Byambasüren shared power with the democrats, and implemented constitutional and economic reforms.
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Original:  The People's Great Khural (upper house) first met on 3 September and elected a president (MPRP), vice-president (Social Democrat), prime minister (MPRP), and 50 members to the Baga Hural (lower house).
Revised:  The People's Great Khural (upper house) first met on 3 September and elected a president (MPRP), vice president (Social Democrat), prime minister (MPRP), and 50 members to the Baga Hural (lower house).
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Original:  The vice-president was also chairman of the Baga Khural.
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Original:  The main organisers  included Davaadorjiin Ganbold, Tsakhiagiin Elbegdorj, Sanjaasürengiin Zorig, Erdeniin Bat-Üül, Bat-Erdeniin Batbayar, and Dogmidiin Sosorbaram.
Revised:  The main organisers of the demonstrations included Davaadorjiin Ganbold, Tsakhiagiin Elbegdorj, Sanjaasürengiin Zorig, Erdeniin Bat-Üül, Bat-Erdeniin Batbayar, and Dogmidiin Sosorbaram.
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Original: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which eventually led to the country's transition to a multi-party system.
Revised: The Mongolian Revolution of 1990, known in Mongolia as the 1990 Democratic Revolution (, ), was a peaceful democratic revolution which led to the country's transition to a multi-party system.
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Original:  Nonetheless , the MPRP government of the early multi-party period had already begun transitioning the country to a market economy by 1993.
Revised:  However , the MPRP government of the early multi-party period had already begun transitioning the country to a market economy by 1993.
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Original: Jacobus Groenendaal (1 November 1805 – 27 November 1860) was a South African politician and statesman of Dutch origin, member of the Volksraad of the Orange Free State and the republic's first Treasurer General and Government Secretary in office from 1854 to 1855 and 1856 respectively.
Revised: Jacobus Groenendaal (1 November 1805 – 27 November 1860) was a South African statesman of Dutch origin, member of the Volksraad of the Orange Free State and the republic's first Treasurer General and Government Secretary in office from 1854 to 1855 and 1856 respectively.
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Original: Early life Born in Brașov, Romania, Cornea began studying French and Italian at Cluj University in 1948.
Revised: Early life Born in Brașov, Romania, Cornea began studying French and Italian at the University of Cluj in 1948.
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Original: Deletant, p.261 She returned to Cluj in 1958  where she worked as an assistant professor at the Babeș-Bolyai University.
Revised: Deletant, p.261 She returned to Cluj in 1958 , where she worked as an assistant professor at the Babeș-Bolyai University.
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Original:  In August 1987, she addressed an open letter to Nicolae Ceaușescu, in which she advocated reform in the higher education: greater academic freedom and university autonomy (to prevent them from being subservient to the interests of the  Party), more exchanges with foreign universities, exemption from the mandatory participation in harvesting and teaching students how to think instead of just facts.
Revised:  In August 1987, she addressed an open letter to Ceaușescu, in which she advocated reform in the higher education: greater academic freedom and university autonomy (to prevent them from being subservient to the interests of the Party), more exchanges with foreign universities, exemption from the mandatory participation in harvesting and teaching students how to think instead of just facts.
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