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Original:  An Egyptian being held in the Netherlands told U.S. officials of a plot to use a vehicle bomb , according to a CBS News correspondent Bob Orr . Nearly 30 people of Egyptian heritage have been questioned by the FBI as part of the investigation . State and federal police first started investigating the small market in southeast Baltimore on Thursday last week when the threat first immerged.
Revised:  An Egyptian being held in the Netherlands told U.S. officials of a plot to use a vehicle bomb , according to a CBS News correspondent Bob Orr . Nearly 30 people of Egyptian heritage have been questioned by the FBI . State and federal police first started investigating the small market in southeast Baltimore on Thursday last week when the threat first immerged.
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Original:  An Egyptian being held in the Netherlands told U.S. officials of a plot to use a vehicle bomb , according to a CBS News correspondent Bob Orr . Nearly 30 people of Egyptian heritage have been questioned by the FBI as part of the investigation . State and federal police first started investigating the small market in southeast Baltimore on Thursday last week when the threat first immerged.
Revised:  An Egyptian being held in the Netherlands told U.S. officials of a plot to use a vehicle bomb , according to a CBS News correspondent Bob Orr . Nearly 30 people of Egyptian heritage have been questioned by the FBI as part of the investigation . The investigation seems to have centered on a small market in southeast Baltimore on Thursday last week when the threat first immerged.
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Original:  An Egyptian being held in the Netherlands told U.S. officials of a plot to use a vehicle bomb , according to a CBS News correspondent Bob Orr . Nearly 30 people of Egyptian heritage have been questioned by the FBI as part of the investigation . State and federal police first started investigating the small market in southeast Baltimore on Thursday last week when the threat first immerged.
Revised:  An Egyptian being held in the Netherlands told U.S. officials of a plot to use a vehicle bomb , according to a CBS News correspondent Bob Orr . Nearly 30 people of Egyptian heritage have been questioned by the FBI as part of the investigation . State and federal police first started investigating the small market in southeast Baltimore when the threat first immerged.
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Original:  Both north and southbound traffic of the Harbor Tunnel, and all but two lanes in the Fort McHenry Tunnel were stopped before noontime as a precaution, causing traffic backups.
Revised:  All north and southbound traffic of the Harbor Tunnel, and all but two lanes in the Fort McHenry Tunnel were stopped before noontime as a precaution, causing traffic backups.
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Original:  Both north and southbound traffic of the Harbor Tunnel, and all but two lanes in the Fort McHenry Tunnel were stopped before noontime as a precaution, causing traffic backups.
Revised:  Both north and southbound traffic of the Harbor Tunnel, and all but two lanes of the Fort McHenry Tunnel were stopped before noontime as a precaution, causing traffic backups.
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Original:  While authorities are unsure of the credibility of the threat, the Maryland Transportaion Authority made the closure at the urging of the FBI.
Revised:  While authorities are unsure of the credibility of the threat, the Maryland Transportaion Authority made the closure with the urging of the FBI.
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Original:  There were no heavy  delays reported on the  city's beltway .
Revised:  There were no heavy traffic delays reported on the city's beltway .
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Original:  Maryland 's governor Bob Ehrlich described in an afternoon news conference what was a combined effort by 80 people at federal, state and local levels , and was directed from a command post set up yesterday , to precede the planned tunnel closures.
Revised:  Maryland governor Bob Ehrlich described in an afternoon news conference what was a combined effort by 80 people at federal, state and local levels , and was directed from a command post set up yesterday , to precede the planned tunnel closures.
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Original:  Maryland 's governor Bob Ehrlich described in an afternoon news conference what was a combined effort by 80 people at federal, state and local levels , and was directed from a command post set up yesterday , to precede the planned tunnel closures.
Revised:  Maryland 's governor Bob Ehrlich held an afternoon news conference what was a combined effort by 80 people at federal, state and local levels , and was directed from a command post set up yesterday , to precede the planned tunnel closures.
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Original:  Maryland 's governor Bob Ehrlich described in an afternoon news conference what was a combined effort by 80 people at federal, state and local levels , and was directed from a command post set up yesterday , to precede the planned tunnel closures.
Revised:  Maryland 's governor Bob Ehrlich described in an afternoon news conference what was a combined effort at federal, state and local levels , and was directed from a command post set up yesterday , to precede the planned tunnel closures.
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Original:  Maryland 's governor Bob Ehrlich described in an afternoon news conference what was a combined effort by 80 people at federal, state and local levels , and was directed from a command post set up yesterday , to precede the planned tunnel closures.
Revised:  Maryland 's governor Bob Ehrlich described in an afternoon news conference what was a combined effort by 80 people at federal, state and local levels , and was directed from a command post set up yesterday .
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Original:  FBI special agent in charge  , Kevin Perkins, said of the intelligence they had gathered that "... the information was somewhat specific as to the date and time of the attack" , and that authorities were excercizing "an abundance of caution" in reacting to the threat .
Revised:  FBI special agent in charge , Kevin Perkins, said the information they gathered "... the information was somewhat specific as to the date and time of the attack" , and that authorities were excercizing "an abundance of caution" in reacting to the threat .
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Original:  FBI special agent in charge  , Kevin Perkins, said of the intelligence they had gathered that "... the information was somewhat specific as to the date and time of the attack" , and that authorities were excercizing "an abundance of caution" in reacting to the threat .
Revised:  FBI special agent in charge , Kevin Perkins, said of the intelligence they had gathered that "... was somewhat specific as to the date and time of the attack" , and that authorities were excercizing "an abundance of caution" in reacting to the threat .
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Original:  FBI special agent in charge  , Kevin Perkins, said of the intelligence they had gathered that "... the information was somewhat specific as to the date and time of the attack" , and that authorities were excercizing "an abundance of caution" in reacting to the threat .
Revised:  FBI special agent in charge , Kevin Perkins, said of the intelligence they had gathered that "... the information was somewhat specific as to the date and time " of the threat , and that authorities were excercizing "an abundance of caution" in reacting to the threat .
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Original:  FBI special agent in charge  , Kevin Perkins, said of the intelligence they had gathered that "... the information was somewhat specific as to the date and time of the attack" , and that authorities were excercizing "an abundance of caution" in reacting to the threat .
Revised:  FBI special agent in charge , Kevin Perkins, said of the intelligence they had gathered that "... the information was somewhat specific as to the date and time of the attack" , and that authorities were excercizing "an abundance of caution" in reacting to it .
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Original:  Governor Ehrlich said the investigation had been on-going for two weeks.
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Original:  According to a CBS News correspondent Bob OrrAn , an Egyptian being held in the Netherlands told U.S. officials of a plot involving a vehicle bomb.
Revised:  According to a CBS News correspondent Bob Orr , an Egyptian being held in the Netherlands told U.S. officials of a plot involving a vehicle bomb.
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Original:  Authorities believe the plot was to drive "explosives-laden vehicles" into the tunnel, although which one of the tunnels remained unspecific  
Revised:  Authorities believe the plot was to drive "explosives-laden vehicles" into the tunnel, although which one of the tunnels remained unspecific . 
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Original: A telephoned phone threat by a person who claimed to have information from overseas led state highway officials to disrupt traffic for 2 hours on Tuesday through both harbor tunnels in Baltimore, Maryland.
Revised: A phone threat by a person who claimed to have information from overseas led state highway officials to disrupt traffic for 2 hours on Tuesday through both harbor tunnels in Baltimore, Maryland.
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Original:  According to a CBS News correspondent Bob Orr,  an Egyptian being held in the Netherlands  told U.S. officials of a plot involving a vehicle bomb.
Revised:  According to a CBS News correspondent Bob Orr, an Egyptian being held in the Netherlands who told U.S. officials of a plot involving a vehicle bomb.
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Original:  United States president Barack Obama met with Mubarak after the announcement to discuss the situation in Egypt.
Revised:  United States president Barack Obama spoke with Mubarak after the announcement to discuss the situation in Egypt.
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Original:  My belief that an orderly transition must be meaningful, it must be peaceful, and it must begin now   .
Revised:  My belief that an orderly transition must be meaningful, it must be peaceful, and it must begin now ." .
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Original:   Soon after his announcement, protesters filled the street, demanding that he resigns immediately.
Revised:  Mubarak stated on state television, "I will say with all honesty and without looking at this particular situation that I was not intent on standing for the next elections, because I have spent enough time in serving Egypt." Mubarak added, "I am now careful to conclude my work for Egypt by presenting Egypt to the next government in a constitutional way which will protect Egypt." Soon after his announcement, protesters filled the street, demanding that he resigns immediately.
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Original:   My belief that an orderly transition must be meaningful, it must be peaceful, and it must begin now."
Revised:  ... My belief that an orderly transition must be meaningful, it must be peaceful, and it must begin now."
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Original:  United States Senator John F. Kerry called upon Hosni to work to create "an interim, caretaker government as soon as possible to oversee an orderly transition in the coming months."
Revised:  United States Senator called upon Hosni to work to create "an interim, caretaker government as soon as possible to oversee an orderly transition in the coming months."
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Original:  If you get stranded ... stay with your vehicle," the weather service advised   
Revised:  If you get stranded ... stay with your vehicle," the weather service advised . 
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Original: In Chicago, where snow was heaviest, 1,300 flights were cancelled at .  Midway Airport, the city's smaller airport, suspended flight operations.
Revised: In Chicago, where snow was heaviest, 1,300 flights were cancelled at . Chicago Midway Airport, the city's smaller airport, suspended flight operations.
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Original:  Thundersnow is a rare type of thunderstorm with snow falling instead of rain.
Revised:  Thundersnow is a type of thunderstorm with snow falling instead of rain.
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Original:  If you get stranded ... stay with your vehicle," the weather service advised.
Revised:  If you get stranded ... stay with your vehicle," the National Weather Service advised.
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Original:  If you get stranded ... stay with your vehicle, " the National Weather Service advised.
Revised:  If you get stranded ... stay with your vehicle, " 
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Original:  Rwanda and Burundi are just two nations of several in the region grappling with constitutional change to increase presidential term limits  
Revised:  Rwanda and Burundi are just two nations of several in the region grappling with constitutional change to increase presidential term limits . 
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Original:  The attorney general had asked the court to throw the case, brought by the opposition , out.
Revised:  The government attorney had asked the court to throw the case, brought by the opposition , out.
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Original:  A referendum on constitutional change would be requirednext .
Revised:  A referendum on constitutional change is required .
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Original:  Kagame has grown popular at home and abroad following reconstruction but the constitution did not allow a third term.
Revised:  Kagame has grown popular at home and abroad following reconstruction but the constitution does not allow a third term.
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Original: Queen Elizabeth on August 10, 2015.
Revised: Queen Elizabeth on August 10.
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Original:  At approximately 5:30 PM yesterday, officially surpassed her great-great-grandmother , to become the longest-serving monarch of the United Kingdom .
Revised:  At approximately 5:30 PM yesterday, officially surpassed her great-great-grandmother , to become the longest-serving monarch of the .
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Original:  Victoria was queen for much of the 18th century, with a grand total of 23,226 days, 16 hours  and 23 minutes.
Revised:  Victoria was queen for much of the 18th century, with a grand total of 23,226 days, 16 hours , and 23 minutes.
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Original:  British Prime Minsiter David Cameron said that her reign was "truly humbling" and had been a "golden thread" for British society in the post-war era.
Revised:  British Prime Minister David Cameron said that her reign was "truly humbling" and had been a "golden thread" for British society in the post-war era.
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Original:  Buckingham Palace also unveiled photographs taken by , daughter of musician , in which the Queen was sat in the room where she is briefed by the Prime Minister on a weekly basis.
Revised:  Buckingham Palace unveiled photographs taken by , daughter of musician , in which the Queen was sat in the room where she is briefed by the Prime Minister on a weekly basis.
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Original:  Buckingham Palace also unveiled photographs taken by , daughter of musician , in which the Queen was sat in the room where she is briefed by the Prime Minister on a weekly basis.
Revised:  Buckingham Palace also unveiled photographs taken by , daughter of musician , in which the Queen was sitting in the room where she is briefed by the Prime Minister on a weekly basis.
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Original:  The Frist Minister emphasised the "dedication, wisdom and exemplary sense of public service" of the "Queen of Scots", pointedly referring to the recent unsuccessful referendum on Scottish independence
Revised:  The First Minister emphasised the "dedication, wisdom and exemplary sense of public service" of the "Queen of Scots", pointedly referring to the recent unsuccessful referendum on Scottish independence
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Original:  At approximately 5:30 PM yesterday , Elizabeth II officially surpassed her great-great-grandmother , to become the longest-serving monarch of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  Yesterday , Elizabeth II officially surpassed her great-great-grandmother , to become the longest-serving monarch of the United Kingdom.
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Original: The milestone was the subject of widespread praise from around the world including  the Secretary-General of the Commonwealth of Nations , of which Elizabeth is ceremonial head.
Revised: The milestone was the subject of widespread praise from around the world including , the Secretary-General of the Commonwealth of Nations , of which Elizabeth is ceremonial head.
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Original: The milestone was the subject of widespread praise from around the world including  the Secretary-General of the Commonwealth of Nations , of which Elizabeth is ceremonial head.
Revised: The milestone was the subject of widespread praise from around the world including the Secretary-General of the , of which Elizabeth is ceremonial head.
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Original:  Buckingham Palace unveiled photographs taken by , daughter of musician , in which the Queen was sitting in the room where she is briefed by the Prime Minister on a weekly basis.
Revised:  Buckingham Palace unveiled photographs taken by , daughter of musician , in which the Queen was sitting in the room where she meets the Prime Minister on a weekly basis.
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Original:  The First Minister emphasised the  "dedication, wisdom and exemplary sense of public service" of the "Queen of Scots" , pointedly referring to the recent unsuccessful referendum on Scottish independence
Revised:  The First Minister emphasised the Queen's "dedication, wisdom and exemplary sense of public service" of the "Queen of Scots" , pointedly referring to the recent unsuccessful referendum on Scottish independence
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Original:  The First Minister emphasised the  "dedication, wisdom and exemplary sense of public service" of the "Queen of Scots" , pointedly referring to the recent unsuccessful referendum on Scottish independence
Revised:  The First Minister emphasised the "dedication, wisdom and exemplary sense of public service" of the "Queen of Scots" 
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Original:  The First Minister emphasised the Queen's "dedication, wisdom and exemplary sense of public service" of the "Queen of Scots"
Revised:  The First Minister emphasised the Queen's "dedication, wisdom and exemplary sense of public service" 
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Original: Victoria was queen for much of the 18th century, with a grand total of 23,226 days, 16 hours, and 23 minutes.
Revised: Victoria was queen for much of the 19th century, with a grand total of 23,226 days, 16 hours, and 23 minutes.
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Original: The US federal National Transportation Safety Board  yesterday concluded a "series of errors" by flight crew caused a crash near , Massachusetts last year.
Revised: The US federal National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) yesterday concluded a "series of errors" by flight crew caused a crash near , Massachusetts last year.
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Original:  the US Federal Aviation Administration  was accused of failing to properly check the system before certifying the aircraft.
Revised:  the US Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) was accused of failing to properly check the system before certifying the aircraft.
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Original: "Complacency does not have a place in the cockpit of any aircraft , "  NTSB Vice Chairman Bella Dinh-Zarr said.
Revised: "Complacency does not have a place in the cockpit of any aircraft " NTSB Vice Chairman Bella Dinh-Zarr said.
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Original: "Complacency does not have a place in the cockpit of any aircraft , "  NTSB Vice Chairman Bella Dinh-Zarr said.
Revised: "Complacency does not have a place in the cockpit of any aircraft , " , NTSB Vice Chairman Bella Dinh-Zarr said.
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Original:  "If you ’ re acting that way, you are just fooling yourself," said NTSB member Robert Sumwalt, who has 32 years of commercial flight experience
Revised:  "If you ' re acting that way, you are just fooling yourself," said NTSB member Robert Sumwalt, who has 32 years of commercial flight experience
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Original: The US federal National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) yesterday concluded a "series of errors" by flight crew caused a crash near  , Massachusetts last year.
Revised: The US federal National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) yesterday concluded a "series of errors" by flight crew caused a crash near Boston , Massachusetts last year.
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Original:  The left-leaning Guardian newspaper, which has been heavily critical of the British and US-led occupation, is urgently seeking confirmation of Carroll's whereabouts.
Revised:  The left-leaning Guardian newspaper, which has been critical of the British and US-led occupation, is urgently seeking confirmation of Carroll's whereabouts.
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Original:  Earlier this week Carroll wrote a report highlighting claims that a US air strike had killed "dozens of women and children".
Revised:  Earlier this week he penned a report highlighting claims that a US air strike had killed "dozens of women and children".
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Original: China has announced a new out break of the Avian Flu today .
Revised: China has announced a new outbreak of the Avian Flu today .
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Original:  China's news agency reported that 2,600 birds have died of the H5N1 strain in northren China.
Revised:  China's news agency reported that 2,600 birds have died of the H5N1 strain in 
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Original:  They reported that the out brek was found in a breeding facility in Hohhot which is the capital of Inner Mongolia.
Revised:  northern China, declaring that the outbreak was found in a breeding facility in Hohhot which is the capital of Inner Mongolia.
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Original:  They reported that the out brek was found in a breeding facility in Hohhot which is the capital of Inner Mongolia.
Revised:  They reported that the out brek was found in a breeding facility in Hohhot , the capital of Inner Mongolia.
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Original:  The government maintains the epidemic is under-control .
Revised:  The government maintains the epidemic is under control .
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Original:  Russia is waiting for confirmaton that  the H5N1 strain  killed several hundred ducks near Moscow .
Revised:  Russia is waiting for confirmaton that the H5N1 strain that killed several hundred ducks near Moscow .
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Original:  A small village is southern Macedonia also suspect the strain.
Revised:  A small village in southern Macedonia also suspect the strain.
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Original:  A small village is southern Macedonia also suspect the strain.
Revised:  A small village is southern Macedonia also suspects the strain.
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Original:  Romania confirmed that there is another out-break in the Danube Delta area.
Revised:  Romania confirmed that there has been another outbreak in the Danube Delta area.
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Original:  H5N1 is the strain scientists fear could be transmitted into human 's causing as flu pandemic.
Revised:  H5N1 is the strain scientists fear could be transmitted from human to human, causing a flu pandemic.
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Original:  So far 50 people have died of it, all  worked closely with birds.
Revised:  So far 50 people have died of it, all having worked closely with birds.
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Original:  It is not easy to pass the disease from bird to human  
Revised:  It is not easy to pass the disease from bird to human . 
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Original:  It is not easy to pass the disease from bird to human . Previous related news Bird flu may infect 20 percent of world's population, kill millions World Health Organisation: China engaging in bird flu cover u
Revised:  It is not easy to pass the disease from bird to human Previous related news Bird flu may infect 20 percent of world's population, kill millions World Health Organisation: China engaging in bird flu cover u
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Original:  It is not easy to pass the disease from bird to human . Previous related news Bird flu may infect 20 percent of world's population, kill millions World Health Organisation: China engaging in bird flu cover u
Revised:  It is not easy to pass the disease from bird to human . 
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