wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: image:Superdome shelter.jpg|Superdome - those unable to evacuate lined up before Katrina's arrival  for shelter in the sports arena.
Revised: image:Superdome shelter.jpg|Superdome - those unable to evacuate before Katrina's arrival for shelter in the sports arena.
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Original: image:Superdome shelter.jpg|Superdome - those unable to evacuate lined up before Katrina's arrival  for shelter in the sports arena.
Revised: image:Superdome shelter.jpg|Superdome - those unable to evacuate lined up before Katrina's arrival lined up for shelter in the sports arena.
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Original:  Actress Mia Farrow and Carole White have testified against former-Liberian president Charles Taylor in his war crimes trial at the Special Court for Sierra Leone in The Hague, The Netherlands.
Revised:  Actress Mia Farrow and Carole White have testified in former-Liberian president Charles Taylor in his war crimes trial at the Special Court for Sierra Leone in The Hague, The Netherlands.
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Original:  Actress Mia Farrow and Carole White have testified against former-Liberian president Charles Taylor in his war crimes trial at the Special Court for Sierra Leone in The Hague, The Netherlands.
Revised:  Actress Mia Farrow and Carole White have testified against former-Liberian president Charles Taylor 's war crimes trial at the Special Court for Sierra Leone in The Hague, The Netherlands.
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Original: According to White , Campbell was "mildly flirtatious" with Taylor at a dinner in  1997.
Revised: White said Campbell was "mildly flirtatious" with Taylor at a dinner in 1997.
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Original:   Taylor allegedly told Campbell he would send her diamonds.
Revised:  . Taylor allegedly told Campbell he would send her diamonds.
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Original: White said Campbell was "mildly flirtatious" with Taylor at a dinner in South Africa in 1997. . Taylorallegedly told Campbell he would send her diamonds.
Revised: White said Campbell was "mildly flirtatious" with Taylor at a dinner in South Africa in 1997. Taylor, she alleged, told Campbell he would send her diamonds.
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Original:  ]] Actress and Carole White have testified in former-Liberian president Charles Taylor's war crimes trial at the  for Sierra Leone in The Hague, The Netherlands.
Revised:  ]] Actress and Carole White have testified in former-Liberian president Charles Taylor's war crimes trial at the Special Court for Sierra Leone in The Hague, The Netherlands.
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Original: A family of 6 were injured at Flat Rock Bridge Family Resort and campground in Lebanon, Maine after a severe thunderstorm caused tress to topple, with one landing on a tent.
Revised: A family of six were injured at Flat Rock Bridge Family Resort and campground in Lebanon, Maine after a severe thunderstorm caused tress to topple, with one landing on a tent.
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Original:  Witnesses also say the day was beautiful and sunny, then at around 6:00 p.m. (EDT) a storm rolled in darkening the sky followed by heavy winds and rain.
Revised:  Witnesses also say the day was beautiful and sunny, but at around 6:00 p.m. (EDT) a storm rolled in darkening the sky followed by heavy winds and rain.
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Original:  Witnesses describe a " funnel like wind" which picked up items off the ground and threw them around.
Revised:  Witnesses describe a " funnel-like wind" which picked up items off the ground and threw them around.
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Original:  The  winds then brought down trees and limbs, with one landing on the family's campsite and tent.
Revised:  The strong winds then brought down trees and limbs, with one landing on the family's campsite and tent.
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Original: The plane at the crash scene Former US Senator Ted Stevens, 86, and former NASA administrator Sean O'Keefe, 54, were on an airplane that crashed in southwest Alaska, the Associated Press reports.
Revised: The wreckage of the plane Former US Senator Ted Stevens, 86, and former NASA administrator Sean O'Keefe, 54, were on an airplane that crashed in southwest Alaska, the Associated Press reports.
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Original: The wreckage of the plane Former US Senator Ted Stevens , 86, and former NASA administrator Sean O'Keefe , 54, were on an airplane that crashed in southwest Alaska, the Associated Press reports.
Revised: The wreckage of the plane Former US , 86, and former NASA administrator Sean O'Keefe , 54, were on an airplane that crashed in southwest Alaska, the Associated Press reports.
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Original: The wreckage of the plane Former US Senator Ted Stevens , 86, and former NASA administrator Sean O'Keefe , 54, were on an airplane that crashed in southwest Alaska, the Associated Press reports.
Revised: The wreckage of the plane Former US Senator Ted Stevens , 86, and former NASA administrator , 54, were on an airplane that crashed in southwest Alaska, the Associated Press reports.
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Original:  Ted Stevens was born on November 18, 1923 in Indianapolis , Indiana.
Revised:  Ted Stevens was born on November 18, 1923 in , Indiana.
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Original:  He began serving as a US Senator for Alaska in 1968, and held the postition until 2009, when he was defeated in a reelection bid by Mark Begich .
Revised:  He began serving as a US Senator for Alaska in 1968, and held the postition until 2009, when he was defeated in a reelection bid by .
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Original:  He resigned in 2005 to become the chancellor of Louisiana State University . "Alaskan Democrat gains in US Senate race".
Revised:  He resigned in 2005 to become the chancellor of . "Alaskan Democrat gains in US Senate race".
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Original: Pornographic images are to be blocked in Indonesia The Indonesian Ministry of Communications and Information Technology has announced that the government will be banning pornographic sites in the country.
Revised:  The Indonesian Ministry of Communications and Information Technology has announced that the government will be banning pornographic sites in the country.
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Original: The  Indonesian Ministry of Communications and Information Technology has announced that the government will be banning pornographic sites in the country.
Revised: The message one Indonesian saw when attempting to access pornography today The Indonesian Ministry of Communications and Information Technology has announced that the government will be banning pornographic sites in the country.
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Original: Slater's intercom cursing and dramatic exit was apparently provoked by a passenger that swore at Slater and hit him with her luggage.
Revised: Slater's intercom cursing and dramatic exit was apparently provoked by a passenger who swore at Slater and hit him with her luggage.
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Original:  More formally, a problem is said to be in P if running the problem there is a program for a Turing machine, an ideal theoretical computer with unbounded amounts of memory, such that running instances of the problem through the program will always answer the question in time bounded by the length of the input.
Revised:  More formally, a problem is said to be in P if there is a program for a Turing machine, an ideal theoretical computer with unbounded amounts of memory, such that running instances of the problem through the program will always answer the question in time bounded by the length of the input.
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Original:  A problem is said to be in NP, if the problem can be solved in polynomial time when it is instead of being run on a Turing machine, it is run on a non-deterministic Turing machine, which is like a Turing machine but it the machine is able to make copies of itself to try different approaches to the problem simultaneously.
Revised:  A problem is said to be in NP, if the problem can be solved in polynomial time when it is instead of being run on a Turing machine, it is run on a non-deterministic Turing machine, which is like a Turing machine but is able to make copies of itself to try different approaches to the problem simultaneously.
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Original:  More formally, a problem is said to be in P if there is a program for a Turing machine, an ideal theoretical computer with unbounded amounts of memory, such that running instances of the problem through the program will always answer the question in time bounded by the length of the input.
Revised:  More formally, a problem is said to be in P if there is a program for a Turing machine, an ideal theoretical computer with unbounded amounts of memory, such that running instances of the problem through the program will always answer the question in polynomial time — time always bounded by some fixed polynomial power of the length of the input.
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Original: The question of whether P equals NP essentially asks whether there are categories of problems where short proofs exist but finding those proofs is difficult .
Revised: The question of whether P equals NP essentially asks whether there exists problems which take a long time to solve but whose solution can be checked quickly .
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Original:  Others have raised specific technical issues with the proof but noted that the proof attempt clearly presented interesting new techniques that would be relevant to computer science whether or not the proof turns out to be correct.
Revised:  Others have raised specific technical issues with the proof but noted that the proof attempt presented interesting new techniques that would be relevant to computer science whether or not the proof turns out to be correct.
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Original:  Others have raised specific technical issues with the proof but noted that the proof attempt clearly presented interesting new techniques that would be relevant to computer science whether or not the proof turns out to be correct.
Revised:  Others have raised specific technical issues with the proof but noted that the proof attempt clearly presented interesting new techniques that might be relevant to computer science whether or not the proof turns out to be correct.
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Original:  On August 11, 2010, Lipton reported that consensus of the reviewers was best summarized by mathematician w: Terence Tao, who expressed the view that Deolalikar's paper probably did not give a proof that P!
Revised:  On August 11, 2010, Lipton reported that consensus of the reviewers was best summarized by mathematician Terence Tao, who expressed the view that Deolalikar's paper probably did not give a proof that P!
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Original:  Lipton has listed four central objections to the proof, none of which are necessarily fatal but may require more work to address  .
Revised:  Lipton has listed four central objections to the proof, that could be fatal but may require more work to address .
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Original:                                         []        []                                 []    Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
Revised:  (then) [] [] [] Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
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Original:                                         []        []                                 []    Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
Revised:  (and) [] [] [] Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
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Original:                                         []        []                                 []    Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
Revised:  Then: [] [] [] Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
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Original:                                         []        []                                 []    Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
Revised:  Yes. [] [] [] Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
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Original:                                         []        []                                 []    Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
Revised:  So I ask YOU!: [] [] [] Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
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Original:                                         []        []                                 []    Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
Revised:  [] Still want to call me a 'spammer' and ridicule what you may or may not understand only to generate a permenant record for your great grand children of mocking ignorance in the face of truth as plain as the nose on your face? [] [] Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
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Original:                                         []        []                                 []    Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
Revised:  [] Okay,[] [] Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
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Original:                                         []        []                                 []    Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
Revised:  [] [] Well let's see... If we have written: [] Vinay Deolalikar, a mathematician who works for HP Labs, claims to have proven that P is not equal to NP.
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Original:  Much of modern cryptography, such as the RSA algorithm and the Diffie-Hellman algorithm , rests on certain problems, such as factoring integers, being in NP and not in P.
Revised:  Much of modern cryptography, such as the and the , rests on certain problems, such as factoring integers, being in NP and not in P.
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Original:  If P does not equal NP then many natural, practical problems such as the traveling salesman problem are intrinsically difficult.
Revised:  If P does not equal NP then many natural, practical problems such as the are intrinsically difficult.
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Original:  Rescue efforts were firstly focused on a ventilation shaft, but it failed.
Revised:  Rescue efforts were first focused on a ventilation shaft, but it failed.
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Original:  "The situation is very complex, the mine continues to have collapses because there is a geological fault-line," said Sebastián Piñera, President of Chile, and "pledged to do everything possible to get to the trapped miners," but he acknowledged he was pessimistic.
Revised:  "The situation is very complex, the mine continues to have collapses because there is a geological fault-line," said Sebastián Piñera, President of Chile, who "pledged to do everything possible to get to the trapped miners," but he acknowledged he was pessimistic.
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Original:  "The situation is very complex, the mine continues to have collapses because there is a geological fault-line," said Sebastián Piñera, President of Chile, and "pledged to do everything possible to get to the trapped miners," but he acknowledged he was pessimistic.
Revised:  "The situation is very complex, the mine continues to have collapses because there is a geological fault-line," said Sebastián Piñera, President of Chile, and "pledged to do everything possible to get to the trapped miners," but acknowledged he was pessimistic.
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Original:  There is no certainty the miners are still alive, and they are trapped about 400 meters (1300 feet) below the ground 
Revised:  There is no certainty that the miners, who are trapped about 400 meters (1300 feet) below the ground 
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Original: There were differences among different races.
Revised: There were differences among races.
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Original:  Girls reaching puberty at a younger age are more likely to attempt suicide and have early sexual activity that girls who do not reach puberty as early .
Revised:  Girls reaching puberty at a younger age are more likely to attempt suicide .
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Original:  The study, which was conducted in New York's East Harlem, the Cincinnati metropolitan area and the San Francisco Bay area, showed that by age 8 , 27\% of girls had begun puberty and showed breast development.
Revised:  The study, which was conducted in New York's East Harlem, the Cincinnati metropolitan area and the San Francisco Bay area, showed that by age eight , 27\% of girls had begun puberty and showed breast development.
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Original:  By age 7 , 15\% of girls were developing breasts.
Revised:  By age seven , 15\% of girls were developing breasts.
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Original: Curfew has been imposed in Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India and other nearby towns today to stop the march to Pampore by the Separatists to observe the death anniversary of a Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
Revised: A curfew has been imposed in Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India and other nearby towns today to stop the march to Pampore by the Separatists to observe the death anniversary of a Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
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Original: Curfew has been imposed in Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India and other nearby towns today to stop the march to Pampore by the Separatists to observe the death anniversary of a Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
Revised: Curfew has been imposed in Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India and other nearby towns today to stop the march to Pampore by separatists to observe the death anniversary of a Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
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Original: Curfew has been imposed in Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India and other nearby towns today to stop the march to Pampore by the Separatists to observe the death anniversary of a Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
Revised: Curfew has been imposed in Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India and other nearby towns today to stop the march to Pampore by the Separatists to observe the death anniversary of an Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
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Original:  The separatists asked people to shut their businesses for the day and march to Pampore, the place where Aziz was buried.
Revised:  The separatists asked people to close their businesses for the day and march to Pampore, the place where Aziz was buried.
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Original:  The separatists asked people to shut their businesses for the day and march to Pampore, the place where Aziz was buried.
Revised:  The separatists asked people to shut their businesses for the day and march to Pampore, where Aziz was buried.
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Original:  Aziz was killed during the 'Muzaffarabad chalo' by the soldiers on August 11, 2008.
Revised:  Aziz was killed during the 'Muzaffarabad chalo' by soldiers on August 11, 2008.
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Original:  Syed Ali Shah Geelani, Separatist leader, was also placed under house arrest.
Revised:  Syed Ali Shah Geelani, a separatist leader, was also placed under house arrest.
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Original:  Tensions have started in Kashmir after the recovery of a teenager named Bukhari who went missing after his arrest this morning.
Revised:  Tensions began in Kashmir after the recovery of a teenager named Bukhari who went missing after his arrest this morning.
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Original:  Also, four others were killed by the forces at other places .
Revised:  Also, forces killed four others elsewhere .
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Original: A curfew has been imposed in Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India and other nearby towns today to stop the march to Pampore by separatists to observe the death anniversary of an Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
Revised: A curfew has been imposed in Srinagar, Jammu and Kashmir, India and other nearby towns today to stop the march to Pampore by the Separatists. The march was organized to observe the death anniversary of an Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
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Original:  Aziz was killed during the 'Muzaffarabad chalo' by  soldiers on August 11, 2008.
Revised:  Aziz was killed during the 'Muzaffarabad chalo' by the soldiers on August 11, 2008.
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Original:  Three people were injured when the forces tried to disperse a march from Palhalan to attend Bukhari's funneral.
Revised:  Three people were injured when the forces tried to disperse a march from Palhalan who had come attend Bukhari's funneral.
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Original:  The march was organized to observe the death anniversary of a Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
Revised:  The march was organized to observe the death anniversary of Hurriyat leader Sheikh Abdul Aziz.
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Original:  It lasts till Eid ul-Fitr or the next full moon.
Revised:  It lasts till Eid ul-Fitr or the next new moon.
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Original:  The "very rare cases of overheating," said Apple, were caused by faulty batteries traced back to a single supplier, but they did not identify the supplier's name .
Revised:  The "very rare cases of overheating," said Apple, were caused by faulty batteries traced back to a single supplier, whose name was not given .
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Original:  The ministry responded by calling Apple's postponement of the report "truly regrettable.  
Revised:  The ministry responded by calling Apple's postponement of the report "truly regrettable. " 
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Original:  In an online statement, the Japanese unit of Apple Inc. said that it will replace overheating first-generation iPod Nanos.
Revised: The first-generation iPod Nano In an online statement, the Japanese unit of Apple Inc. said that it will replace overheating first-generation iPod Nanos.
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Original:  Apple had originally only offered to replace the defective batteries, rather than the whole device.
Revised:  Apple had originally only offered to replace the defective batteries, not the whole device.
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Original:  The new decision came after Apple received criticism from the Japanese government over the defective batteries in the portable music players.
Revised:  The change came after Apple received criticism from the Japanese government over the defective batteries in the portable music players.
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Original:  The "very rare cases of overheating , " said Apple, were caused by faulty batteries traced back to a single supplier, whose name was not given.
Revised:  Apple stated that the "very rare cases of overheating , " said Apple, were caused by faulty batteries traced back to a single supplier, whose name was not given.
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Original:  The "very rare cases of overheating , " said Apple, were caused by faulty batteries traced back to a single supplier, whose name was not given.
Revised:  The "very rare cases of overheating " said Apple, were caused by faulty batteries traced back to a single supplier, whose name was not given.
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Original:  The "very rare cases of overheating , " said Apple, were caused by faulty batteries traced back to a single supplier, whose name was not given.
Revised:  The "very rare cases of overheating , " were caused by faulty batteries traced back to a single supplier, whose name was not given.
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Original:  Other iPod Nanos did not have the issue, which occurs during the recharging process , the company added.
Revised:  According to the company, other iPod Nanos did not have the issue, which occurs during the recharging process , the company added.
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Original:  Other iPod Nanos did not have the issue, which occurs during the recharging process , the company added.
Revised:  Other iPod Nanos did not have the issue, which occurs during the recharging process ..
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