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Original:  Many within the political cycles and Sufi Brotherhoods of Northern Nigeria held that Gumi was the principle that drove a wedge between Muslims and non Muslims in Northern Nigeria , his interpretations of the Hadith and Qur'an were based on his own personal views and not the Sunnah , and that he was monopolizing the mass media for his personal views.
Revised:  Many within the political cycles and Sufi Brotherhoods of Northern Nigeria held that Gumi was the principle that drove a wedge between Muslims and non Muslims in Northern Nigeria ; that his interpretations of the Hadith and Qur'an were based on his own personal views and not the Sunnah , and that he was monopolizing the mass media for his personal views.
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Original:  Many within the political cycles and Sufi Brotherhoods of Northern Nigeria held that Gumi was the principle that drove a wedge between Muslims and non Muslims in Northern Nigeria , his interpretations of the Hadith and Qur'an were based on his own personal views and not the Sunnah , and that he was monopolizing the mass media for his personal views.
Revised:  Many within the political cycles and Sufi Brotherhoods of Northern Nigeria held that Gumi was the principle that drove a wedge between Muslims and non Muslims in Northern Nigeria , his interpretations of the Hadith and Qur'an were based on his own personal views and not the Sunnah ; and that he was monopolizing the mass media for his personal views.
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Original:  Gumi believed that Nigerian Muslims should never accept a non-Muslim ruler but also advocated peaceful coexistence with non-Muslims groups.
Revised:  Gumi believed that Nigerian Muslims should never accept a non-Muslim ruler , but he also advocated peaceful coexistence with non-Muslims groups.
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Original:  Gumi believed that Nigerian Muslims should never accept a non-Muslim ruler but also advocated peaceful coexistence with non-Muslims groups.
Revised:  Gumi believed that Nigerian Muslims should never accept a non-Muslim ruler but also advocated peaceful coexistence with non-Muslim groups.
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Original: The Independent: "Obituary: Sheikh Abubakar Mahmud Gumi" by Karl Maier 16 September 1992 Awards and honors He received the Commander of the Order of the Federal Republic in 1987, he received the King Faisal International Prize from Saudi Arabia for his translation of the Quran into  Hausa language.
Revised: The Independent: "Obituary: Sheikh Abubakar Mahmud Gumi" by Karl Maier 16 September 1992 Awards and honors He received the Commander of the Order of the Federal Republic in 1987, he received the King Faisal International Prize from Saudi Arabia for his translation of the Quran into the Hausa language.
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Original:  The rise of this movement Izalatul Bidi'a Wa Ikamatul Sunnah or Movement for the Revival of the Sunnah, popularly called Izala, heralded the radicalization of Northern Nigeria.
Revised:  The rise of this movement Izalatul Bidi'a Wa Ikamatul Sunnah or Movement for the Revival of the Sunnah, popularly called Izala, heralded the Islamic
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Original: Rise of Izala and Islamic Organization that took the mantle of Islamic preaching and political organizing, the organization is known for building mosques, schools for women and girls, as well philanthropic works like mass tree planting campaigns Carrie out mostly in northern Nigeria.
Revised: Rise of Izala and Islamic Fundamentalism
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Original:  Schachar RA. "The Mechanism of Accommodation and Presbyopia" Kugler Publication, Amsterdam, The Netherlands, 2012.
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Original:  Parasypatholytic drugs like atropine will also cause paralysis of accommodation.
Revised:  Parasympatholytic drugs like atropine will also cause paralysis of accommodation.
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Original: Accommodative insufficiency Accommodative insufficiency is the condition where amplitude of accommodation of a person is lesser compared to physiological limits for his age.
Revised: Accommodative insufficiency Accommodative insufficiency is the condition where amplitude of accommodation of a person is lesser compared to physiological limits for their age.
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Original:  vertebrate eye changes optical power to maintain a clear image or focus on an object as its distance varies.
Revised: thumbnail|Minimum (top) and maximum accommodation (bottom). Accommodation is the process by which the vertebrate eye changes optical power to maintain a clear image or focus on an object as its distance varies.
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Original:  Once presbyopia occurs, those who are emmetropic (  do not require optical correction for distance vision) will need an optical aid for near vision;
Revised:  Once presbyopia occurs, those who are emmetropic ( i.e., do not require optical correction for distance vision) will need an optical aid for near vision;
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Original: The first child to survive Bilateral Renal Agenesis (BRA), Abigail Rose Herrera Beutler, was born on July 2013 to US Congresswoman Jaime Herrera Beutler.
Revised: The first child to survive Bilateral Renal Agenesis (BRA), Abigail Rose Herrera Beutler, was born in July 2013 to US Congresswoman Jaime Herrera Beutler.
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Original:  It can be caused by renal diseases such as bilateral renal agenesis (BRA), atresia of the ureter or urethra causing obstruction of the urinary tract, polycystic or multicystic kidney diseases, renal hypoplasia, amniotic rupture , toxemia, or uteroplacental insufficiency from maternal hypertension.
Revised:  It can be caused by renal diseases such as bilateral renal agenesis (BRA), atresia of the ureter or urethra causing obstruction of the urinary tract, polycystic or multicystic kidney diseases, renal hypoplasia, rupture , toxemia, or uteroplacental insufficiency from maternal hypertension.
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Original:  It can be caused by renal diseases such as bilateral renal agenesis (BRA), atresia of the ureter or urethra causing obstruction of the urinary tract, polycystic or multicystic kidney diseases, renal hypoplasia, rupture ]]], toxemia, or uteroplacental insufficiency from maternal hypertension.
Revised:  It can be caused by renal diseases such as bilateral renal agenesis (BRA), atresia of the ureter or urethra causing obstruction of the urinary tract, polycystic or multicystic kidney diseases, renal hypoplasia, URL rupture ]]], toxemia, or uteroplacental insufficiency from maternal hypertension.
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Original: Ali Sabry , is the Egyptian Minister of Military Production.
Revised: Ali Sabry is the Egyptian Minister of Military Production.
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Original:  He was sworn into Prime Minister Hesham Qandil's cabinet, the Qandil Cabinet, on 2 August 2012, following the 2011-2012 Egyptian uprising that deposed President Hosni Mubarak.
Revised:  He was sworn into Prime Minister Hesham Qandil's cabinet, the Qandil Cabinet, on 2 August 2012, following the 2011–2012 Egyptian uprising that deposed President Hosni Mubarak.
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Original:  See also Elections in Egypt List of political parties in Egypt Timeline of the 2011-2012 Egyptian revolution under  Supreme Council of the Armed Forces
Revised:  See also Elections in Egypt List of political parties in Egypt Timeline of the 2011 Egyptian revolution under Supreme Council of the Armed Forces
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Original:  See also Elections in Egypt List of political parties in Egypt Timeline of the 2011-2012 Egyptian revolution under  Supreme Council of the Armed Forces
Revised:  See also Elections in Egypt List of political parties in Egypt Timeline of the 2011-2012 Egyptian revolution under the Supreme Council of the Armed Forces
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Original: Political career Sabry was appointed Minister of Military Production by former Egyptian premier Kamal Ganzouri in the interim government in December 2011.
Revised: Political career Sabry was appointed minister of military production by former Egyptian premier Kamal Ganzouri in the interim government in December 2011.
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Original:  On 2 August 2012, El-Saeed was sworn in as part of Prime Minister Qandil 's Qandil Cabinet, keeping his job as Minister of Military Production .
Revised:  On 2 August 2012, El-Saeed was sworn in as part of the Qandil Cabinet, retaining his post as minister of military production .
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Original: Ali Sabry is the Egyptian Minister of Military Production .
Revised: Ali Sabry is the former Egyptian minister of military production .
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Original:  Bidhan Chandra Roy MRCP, FRCS (1 July 1882 – 1 July 1962) was an Indian physician, educationist, philanthropist, freedom fighter and statesman who served as the Chief Minister of West Bengal from 1948 until his death in 1962.
Revised: Dr. Bidhan Chandra Roy MRCP, FRCS (1 July 1882 – 1 July 1962) was an Indian physician, educationist, philanthropist, freedom fighter and statesman who served as the Chief Minister of West Bengal from 1948 until his death in 1962.
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Original:  In his free time , he practiced privately, charging a nominal fee.
Revised:  In his free time he practised privately, charging a nominal fee.
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Original:  He made contributions to the organization of medical education.
Revised:  He made contributions to the organisation of medical education.
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Original:  The Chittaranjan Seva Sadan for women and children was opened in 1926 by Dr. Bidhan Chandra Roy Post-independence The nation honored Roy with the Bharat Ratna on 4 February 1961.
Revised:  The Chittaranjan Seva Sadan for women and children was opened in 1926 by Dr. Bidhan Chandra Roy Post independence The nation honored Roy with the Bharat Ratna on 4 February 1961.
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Original:  The Chittaranjan Seva Sadan for women and children was opened in 1926 by Dr. Bidhan Chandra Roy Post-independence The nation honored Roy with the Bharat Ratna on 4 February 1961.
Revised:  The Chittaranjan Seva Sadan for women and children was opened in 1926 by Dr. Bidhan Chandra Roy Post-independence The nation honoured Roy with the Bharat Ratna on 4 February 1961.
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Original: Dr. Bidhan Chandra Roy MRCP, FRCS (1 July 1882 – 1 July 1962) was an Indian physician, educationist, philanthropist, freedom fighter and statesman who served as the Chief Minister of West Bengal from 1948 until his death in 1962.
Revised: Dr. Bidhan Chandra Roy MRCP, FRCS (1 July 1882 – 1 July 1962) was an Indian physician, educationist, philanthropist, freedom fighter and statesman who served as Chief Minister of West Bengal from 1948 until his death in 1962.
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Original:  Bidhan Roy is often considered the Maker of Modern West Bengal due to his key role in the founding of several institutions and five eminent cities, Durgapur, Kalyani, Bidhannagar, Ashokenagar and Habra.
Revised:  Bidhan Roy is often considered the maker of modern West Bengal due to his key role in the founding of several institutions and five eminent cities, Durgapur, Kalyani, Bidhannagar, Ashokenagar and Habra.
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Original:  He is one of the few people in history to have obtained F.R.C.S. and M. R.C.P. degrees simultaneously.
Revised:  He is one of the few people in history to have become both a Fellow of the Royal College of Surgeons and a Member of the Royal College of Physicians.
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Original:  In India, the National Doctors' Day is celebrated in his memory every year on 1 July.
Revised:  In India, the National Doctors' Day is celebrated in his memory every year on the 1st of July.
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Original:  He was awarded Bharat Ratna on 4 February 1961 , India's highest civilian honour . Dr Bidhan Chandra Roy: Vision for young India – The 15 'Gods' India draws inspiration from .
Revised:  He was awarded the Bharat Ratna , India's highest civilian honour . Dr Bidhan Chandra Roy: Vision for young India – The 15 'Gods' India draws inspiration from .
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Original:  He was awarded Bharat Ratna on 4 February 1961 , India's highest civilian honour . Dr Bidhan Chandra Roy: Vision for young India – The 15 'Gods' India draws inspiration from .
Revised:  He was awarded Bharat Ratna on 4 February 1961 , India's highest civilian honour on 4 February 1961. Dr Bidhan Chandra Roy: Vision for young India – The 15 'Gods' India draws inspiration from .
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Original:  Family history Bidhan Chandra Roy's grandfather Prankali Roy was an employee of Baharampur collectorate in Murshidabad district , West Bengal .
Revised:  Family history Bidhan Chandra Roy's grandfather , Prankali Roy, was an employee of Baharampur collectorate in Murshidabad district , West Bengal .
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Original:  Family history Bidhan Chandra Roy's grandfather Prankali Roy was an employee of Baharampur collectorate in Murshidabad district , West Bengal .
Revised:  Family history Bidhan Chandra Roy's grandfather Prankali Roy was an employee of the collectorate of Baharampur in Murshidabad , West Bengal .
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Original:  Bidhan Chandra Roy's motherAghorkamini Devi was the daughter of a Zamindar of Baharampur named Bipin Chandra Bosu.
Revised:  Bidhan Chandra Roy's motherAghorkamini Devi was the daughter of a zamindar of Baharampur named Bipin Chandra Bosu.
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Original:  Early life and education Bidhan Chandra Roy was born  to a Bengali Kayastha family on 1 July 1882 at Bankipore , Patna, Bihar, where his father, Prakash Chandra Roy, was working as an excise inspector.
Revised:  Early life and education Bidhan Chandra Roy was born to a Bengali Kayastha family in Bankipore in Patna, where his father, Prakash Chandra Roy, was working as an excise inspector.
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Original:  Early life and education Bidhan Chandra Roy was born  to a Bengali Kayastha family on 1 July 1882 at Bankipore , Patna, Bihar, where his father, Prakash Chandra Roy, was working as an excise inspector.
Revised:  Early life and education Bidhan Chandra Roy was born to a Bengali Kayastha family on 1 July 1882 at Bankipore , Patna, Bihar, where his father, Prakash Chandra Roy, was serving as an excise inspector.
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Original:  His mother, Aghore Kamini Devi, was a pious lady and a devoted social worker.
Revised:  His mother, Aghorkamini Devi, was a pious lady and a devoted social worker.
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Original:  Prakash Chandra was a descendant of the family of  the rebel Hindu king of Jessore, Maharaja Pradapaditya, but did not inherit much wealth from his ancestors.
Revised:  Prakash Chandra was a descendant of the family of Maharaja Pradapaditya, the rebel Hindu king of Jessore, Maharaja Pradapaditya, but did not inherit much wealth from his ancestors.
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Original:  Prakash Chandra was a descendant of the family of  the rebel Hindu king of Jessore, Maharaja Pradapaditya, but did not inherit much wealth from his ancestors.
Revised:  Prakash Chandra was a descendant of the family of the rebel Hindu king of Jessore, but did not inherit much wealth from his ancestors.
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Original:  He earned only a moderate salary for most part of Bidhan's childhood, yet he and Aghore Kamini supported the education and upbringing of not just their own children but also a number of other poor children, mostly orphans.
Revised:  He earned a moderate salary for most part of Bidhan's childhood, yet he and Aghore Kamini supported the education and upbringing of not just their own children but also a number of other poor children, mostly orphans.
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Original:  He earned only a moderate salary for most part of Bidhan's childhood, yet he and Aghore Kamini supported the education and upbringing of not just their own children but also a number of other poor children, mostly orphans.
Revised:  He earned only a moderate salary for most part of Bidhan's childhood, but he and Aghorkamini supported the education and upbringing of not just their own children but also a number of other poor children, mostly orphans.
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Original:  He earned only a moderate salary for most part of Bidhan's childhood, yet he and Aghore Kamini supported the education and upbringing of not just their own children but also a number of other poor children, mostly orphans.
Revised:  He earned only a moderate salary for most part of Bidhan's childhood, yet he and Aghore Kamini supported the education and upbringing of both their own children but also a number of other poor children, mostly orphans.
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Original:  He earned only a moderate salary for most part of Bidhan's childhood, yet he and Aghore Kamini supported the education and upbringing of not just their own children but also a number of other poor children, mostly orphans.
Revised:  He earned only a moderate salary for most part of Bidhan's childhood, yet he and Aghore Kamini supported the education and upbringing of not just their own children and a number of other poor children, mostly orphans.
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Original:  The spirit of 'give and take' was inculcated in Bidhan and his siblings from their tender years .
Revised:  The spirit of 'give and take' was inculcated in Bidhan and his siblings at a young age .
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Original:  Bidhan completed his matriculation from Patna Collegiate School in 1897,  obtained his I.A. degree from Presidency College, Calcutta and B.A. from Patna College with Honors in Mathematics.
Revised:  Bidhan studied at Patna Collegiate School in 1897, obtained his I.A. degree from Presidency College, Calcutta and B.A. from Patna College with Honors in Mathematics.
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Original:  Bidhan completed his matriculation from Patna Collegiate School in 1897,  obtained his I.A. degree from Presidency College, Calcutta and B.A. from Patna College with Honors in Mathematics.
Revised:  Bidhan completed his matriculation from Patna Collegiate School in 1897, and obtained his I.A. degree from Presidency College, Calcutta and B.A. from Patna College with Honors in Mathematics.
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Original:  After completing his graduation in mathematics , he applied for admission to the IIEST formerly BESU and the Calcutta Medical College.
Revised:  After completing his graduation in mathematics , he applied for admission to the Calcutta Medical College.
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Original:  His application was accepted by both institutions and he opted to pursue medical studies . Bidhan left Patna in June 1901 to join the Calcutta Medical College.
Revised:  His application was accepted by both institutions and he chose to attend the latter . Bidhan left Patna in June 1901 to join the Calcutta Medical College.
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Original:  His application was accepted by both institutions and he opted to pursue medical studies . Bidhan left Patna in June 1901 to join the Calcutta Medical College.
Revised:  His application was accepted by both institutions and he opted to pursue medical studies . Bidhan left Patna in June 1901 to study at the Calcutta Medical College.
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Original:  The partition of Bengal was announced while Bidhan was in college.
Revised:  Bengal was partitioned while Bidhan was in college.
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Original:  Opposition to the partition was being organised by nationalist leaders like Lala Lajpat Rai,  Tilak and Bipin Chandra Pal.
Revised:  Opposition to the partition was being organised by such nationalists as Lala Lajpat Rai, Tilak and Bipin Chandra Pal.
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Original:  Intending to enroll himself at St Bartholomew's Hospital to pursue postgraduate study in medicine, Bidhan set sail for Britain in February 1909 with only 1200.
Revised:  Intending to enroll at St Bartholomew's Hospital to pursue postgraduate study in medicine, Bidhan set sail for Britain in February 1909 with only 1200.
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Original:  Intending to enroll himself at St Bartholomew's Hospital to pursue postgraduate study in medicine, Bidhan set sail for Britain in February 1909 with only 1200.
Revised:  Intending to enroll himself at St Bartholomew's Hospital to complete further studies in medicine, Bidhan set sail for Britain in February 1909 with only 1200.
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Original:  Intending to enroll himself at St Bartholomew's Hospital to pursue postgraduate study in medicine, Bidhan set sail for Britain in February 1909 with only 1200.
Revised:  Intending to enroll himself at St Bartholomew's Hospital to pursue postgraduate study in medicine, Bidhan left for Britain in February 1909 with only 1200.
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Original:  Intending to enroll himself at St Bartholomew's Hospital to pursue postgraduate study in medicine, Bidhan set sail for Britain in February 1909 with only 1200.
Revised:  Intending to enroll himself at St Bartholomew's Hospital to pursue postgraduate study in medicine, Bidhan set sail for Britain in February 1909 with 1200.
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Original:  However, the Dean of St. Bartholomew's Hospital was reluctant to accept an Asian student and rejected Bidhan's application.
Revised:  The then dean of St. Bartholomew's Hospital was reluctant to accept an Asian student and rejected Bidhan's application.
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Original:  Roy did not lose heart but kept submitting his application again and again till the Dean , after 30 admission requests, admitted Bidhan to the college .
Revised:  Roy did not lose heart and submit several additional applications till the dean , after 30 admission requests, admitted Bidhan to the college .
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Original:  Roy did not lose heart but kept submitting his application again and again till the Dean , after 30 admission requests, admitted Bidhan to the college .
Revised:  Roy did not lose heart but kept submitting his application again and again till the Dean , after 30 admission requests, admitted Bidhan .
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Original:  Bidhan completed his postgraduation in just two years and three months, and in May 1911 accomplished the rare feat of becoming a member of the Royal College of Physicians and a fellow of the Royal College of Surgeons simultaneously  .
Revised:  Bidhan completed his studies in only two years and three months, and in May 1911 accomplished the rare feat of becoming a member of the Royal College of Physicians and a fellow of the Royal College of Surgeons simultaneously .
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Original:  Bidhan completed his postgraduation in just two years and three months, and in May 1911 accomplished the rare feat of becoming a member of the Royal College of Physicians and a fellow of the Royal College of Surgeons simultaneously  .
Revised:  Bidhan completed his postgraduation in just two years and three months, and in May 1911 became a member of the Royal College of Physicians and a fellow of the Royal College of Surgeons simultaneously .
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Original:  Bidhan completed his postgraduation in just two years and three months, and in May 1911 accomplished the rare feat of becoming a member of the Royal College of Physicians and a fellow of the Royal College of Surgeons simultaneously  .
Revised:  Bidhan completed his postgraduation in just two years and three months, and in May 1911 accomplished the rare feat of becoming a member of the Royal College of Physicians and a fellow of the Royal College of Surgeons simultaneously (a rare feat) .
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Original:  He returned home from the UK in 1911.
Revised:  He returned home in 1911.
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Original:  Immediately after graduation , Roy joined the Provincial Health Service.
Revised:  Immediately after his return , Roy joined the Provincial Health Service.
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Original:  In his free time he practised privately, charging a nominal fee. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Following his return from England after post-graduation, he taught at the Calcutta Medical College, and later at the Campbell Medical School (now NRS Medical College) and the Carmichael Medical College.
Revised:  In his free time he practised privately, charging a nominal fee. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He also taught at the Calcutta Medical College, and later at the Campbell Medical School (now NRS Medical College) and the Carmichael Medical College.
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