wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  According to the ICRC only " 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system ." Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river . Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk , because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption .
Revised:  According to the ICRC only " 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system ." Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river . Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk , because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" .
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Original:  The ICRC  urged for the rights of Israeli soldier Gilad Shalit, who is held prisoner by Hamas, to be respected.
Revised:  The ICRC has urged for the rights of Israeli soldier Gilad Shalit, who is held prisoner by Hamas, to be respected.
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Original:  ]] Low temperatures, heavy rain  and strong wind took place in Chile on Sunday afternoon amidst several aftershocks from the 2010 Pichilemu earthquake, affecting places from the Coquimbo to Bío Bío regions.
Revised:  ]] Low temperatures, heavy rain , and strong wind took place in Chile on Sunday afternoon amidst several aftershocks from the 2010 Pichilemu earthquake, affecting places from the Coquimbo to Bío Bío regions.
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Original:  ]] Low temperatures, heavy rain  and strong wind took place in Chile on Sunday afternoon amidst several aftershocks from the 2010 Pichilemu earthquake, affecting places from the Coquimbo to Bío Bío regions.
Revised:  ]] Low temperatures, heavy rain and strong wind hit Chile on Sunday afternoon amidst several aftershocks from the 2010 Pichilemu earthquake, affecting places from the Coquimbo to Bío Bío regions.
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Original:  ]] Low temperatures, heavy rain  and strong wind took place in Chile on Sunday afternoon amidst several aftershocks from the 2010 Pichilemu earthquake, affecting places from the Coquimbo to Bío Bío regions.
Revised:  ]] Low temperatures, heavy rain and strong wind took place in Chile on Sunday afternoon amidst several aftershocks from the 2010 Pichilemu earthquake, affecting areas from the Coquimbo to Bío Bío regions.
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Original:  National Emergencies Office (ONEMI) boss, Mauricio Bustos, reported to Radio Cooperativa that the "weather front has provoked rainfalls, winds and even a thunderstorm in Talagante, with some partial power outages in some towns in the  Metropolitan Region." Rains lasted till Tuesday, and no rains are predicted on Wednesday.
Revised:  National Emergencies Office (ONEMI) boss, Mauricio Bustos, reported to Radio Cooperativa that the "weather front has provoked rainfalls, winds and even a thunderstorm in Talagante, with some partial power outages in some towns in the Metropolitan Region." The rain lasted till Tuesday, and no rains are predicted on Wednesday.
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Original:  National Emergencies Office (ONEMI) boss, Mauricio Bustos, reported to Radio Cooperativa that the "weather front has provoked rainfalls, winds and even a thunderstorm in Talagante, with some partial power outages in some towns in the  Metropolitan Region." Rains lasted till Tuesday, and no rains are predicted on Wednesday.
Revised:  National Emergencies Office (ONEMI) boss, Mauricio Bustos, reported to Radio Cooperativa that the "weather front has provoked rainfalls, winds and even a thunderstorm in Talagante, with some partial power outages in some towns in the Metropolitan Region." Rains lasted till Tuesday, and no rain is predicted on Wednesday.
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Original:  A man has died in Pichilemu, O'Higgins Region , after the car he was driving collided with a tree, because the road was very muddy.
Revised:  A man has died in Pichilemu, O'Higgins Region after the car he was driving collided with a tree, because the road was very muddy.
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Original:  A man has died in Pichilemu, O'Higgins Region , after the car he was driving collided with a tree, because the road was very muddy.
Revised:  A man has died in Pichilemu, O'Higgins Region , after the car he was driving collided with a tree, because the road was extremely muddy.
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Original:   In Constitución, a town severely affected by the February 27 earthquake, 100 km/h winds have destroyed  ceilings of houses and caused many power outages.
Revised:  In Constitución, a town severely affected by the February 27 earthquake, 100 km/h winds have destroyed the ceilings of houses and caused many power outages.
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Original:  Also, a bridge was broke in Tanahuillín , the mayor of Santa Juana, Angel Castro reported .
Revised:  Also, a bridge was broke in Tanahuillín according to the mayor of Santa Juana, Angel Castro reported .
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Original:  Also, a bridge was broke in Tanahuillín , the mayor of Santa Juana, Angel Castro reported .
Revised:  Also, a bridge was broke in Tanahuillín , the mayor of Santa Juana, Angel Castro .
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Original:  It has been reported around 150 people have been affected 
Revised:  It has been reported around 150 people have been affected by that incident
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Original: The rain lasted till Tuesday, and no rain is predicted on Wednesday.
Revised: The rain lasted till Tuesday, and no rain was expected on Wednesday.
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Original:  In Constitución, a town severely affected by the February 27 earthquake, 100 km/h winds have destroyed the ceilings of houses and caused many power outages.
Revised:  In Constitución, a town severely affected by the February 27 earthquake, 100 km/h winds destroyed the ceilings of houses and caused many power outages.
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Original:  Five homes were destroyed in the  Vegas Itata Coelemu area by a waterspout;
Revised:  Five homes were destroyed in the region of Vegas Itata Coelemu area by a waterspout;
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Original:  Five homes were destroyed in the  Vegas Itata Coelemu area by a waterspout;
Revised:  Five homes were destroyed in the Vegas Itata Coelemu by a waterspout;
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Original:  it has been reported around 150 people have been affectedby that incident
Revised:  145 people in the area were affected
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Original:  Five homes were destroyed in the region of Vegas Itata Coelemu by a waterspout;
Revised:  Five homes were destroyed in the region around Vegas Itata Coelemu by a waterspout;
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Original: A report released by the United States says that Afghanistan has nearly a trillion dollars worth of mineral reserves.
Revised: A report released by the United States noted that Afghanistan has nearly a trillion dollars worth of mineral reserves.
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Original:  The report, authored by the US military, the US Geological Service, and the US Agency for International Development, says that the total wealth in mineral reserves is upwards of US$900 billion, although Afghan President Hamid Karzai has said the value of mineral reserves in the country could be as much as US$3 trillion.
Revised:  The report, authored by the US military, the US Geological Service, and the US Agency for International Development, stated that the total wealth in mineral reserves is upwards of US$900 billion, although Afghan President Hamid Karzai has said the value of mineral reserves in the country could be as much as US$3 trillion.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Karzai said that "it's very, very big news for the people of Afghanistan and that we hope will bring the Afghan people together for a cause that will benefit everyone."
Revised:  A spokesperson for Karzai stated that "it's very, very big news for the people of Afghanistan and that we hope will bring the Afghan people together for a cause that will benefit everyone."
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Original:  Analysts , however, were less optimistic about the potential for a mining industry , however;
Revised:  Analysts were less optimistic about the potential for a mining industry , however;
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Original:  Analysts , however, were less optimistic about the potential for a mining industry , however;
Revised:  Analysts , however, were less optimistic about the potential for a mining industry .
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Original:  The Sea Org consists of 6,000 members of Scientology, who sign billion-year contracts to work for the organization for multiple lifetimes. 
Revised:  The Sea Org consists of 6,000 members of Scientology, who sign billion-year contracts to work for the organization for multiple lifetimes. Joining the Sea Org is considered a high calling within Scientology.
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Original: The labour dispute between the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation and its union the Canadian Media Guild continues, with no sign that the sides will return to  negotiations.
Revised: The labour dispute between the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation and its union the Canadian Media Guild continues, with no sign that the sides will return to contract negotiations.
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Original:  The main disagreement is over the proportion of permanent workers CBC hires  
Revised:  The main disagreement is over the proportion of permanent workers CBC hires . 
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Original:  The Canadian Media Guild calls CBC management's contract offer "little more than a veiled attempt to buy off employees with their own money 
Revised:  The Canadian Media Guild calls CBC management's contract offer "little more than a veiled attempt to buy off employees with their own money "
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Original:  The CBC has locked out about 5500 of its union employees, which includes broadcasters and technicians.
Revised:  The CBC has locked out about 5500 of its union employees, which include broadcasters and technicians.
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Original: In the aftermath of Bloody Sunday  an inquiry by the Lord Chief Justice, Lord Widgery, justified British army actions on the day and claimed that many of the activists were armed with guns and nail bombs.
Revised: In the aftermath of Bloody Sunday , an inquiry by the Lord Chief Justice, Lord Widgery, justified British army actions on the day and claimed that many of the activists were armed with guns and nail bombs.
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Original:  Around 2,500 people gave testimony  including 505 civilians, nine experts and forensic scientists, 49 journalists, 245 military personnel, 35 paramilitaries or former paramilitaries, 39 politicians and civil servants, seven priests and 33 Royal Ulster Constabulary officers.
Revised:  Around 2,500 people gave testimony , including 505 civilians, nine experts and forensic scientists, 49 journalists, 245 military personnel, 35 paramilitaries or former paramilitaries, 39 politicians and civil servants, seven priests and 33 Royal Ulster Constabulary officers.
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Original:  John Johnston (59) died four months later  
Revised:  John Johnston (59) died four months later . 
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Original: File:Civil Rights Mural SMC May 2007.jpg|"The Beginning", a mural by the Bogside Artists.
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Original: While answering the question, Petraeus slumped over in mid-sentence and the hearing was immediately suspended while several people rushed over from the table and took himfrom the room .
Revised: While answering the question, Petraeus slumped over in mid-sentence and the hearing was immediately suspended while several people rushed over from the table to help him .
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Original:   Another inmate was hospitalised, and later dead ;
Revised:  Another inmate was hospitalised, and later died ;
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Original: According to the public safety secretary , in the first attack, which occurred yesterday, twenty inmates of the jail were shot to death after members of a gang started shooting at a rival group.
Revised: According to the Public Safety Secretary , in the first attack, which occurred yesterday, twenty inmates of the jail were shot to death after members of a gang started shooting at a rival group.
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Original:  three policemen were also hurt , and one is in serious condition.
Revised:  three policemen were also wounded , and one is in serious condition.
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Original:  Eight hours afterwards, another clash erupted, this time when inmates were stabbed by other inmates , according to Public Safety Department spokesman Angeles Moreno.
Revised:  Eight hours afterwards, another clash erupted, this time when inmates were stabbed by fellow prisoners , according to Public Safety Department spokesman Angeles Moreno.
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Original:  He scored in the sixth minute of the first half of extra time with the assist from Adriano  
Revised:  He scored in the sixth minute of the first half of extra time with the assist from Adriano . 
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Original:  The cup is the first opportunity to win trophies in Italian football this season.
Revised:  The cup is the first opportunity to win a trophy in the Italian football season.
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Original:  He scored in the sixth minute of the first half of extra time with the assist from Adriano .
Revised:  He received the assist from Adriano in the sixth minute of the first half of extra time with the assist from Adriano .
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Original:  He scored in the sixth minute of the first half of extra time with the assist from Adriano .
Revised:  He scored in the sixth minute of the first half of extra time .
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Original:  The coach of Inter Milan Roberto Mancini described the match as "tough".
Revised:  Roberto Mancini, coach of Inter Milan Roberto Mancini described the match as "tough".
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Original:  The coach of Inter Milan Roberto Mancini described the match as "tough".
Revised:  The coach of Inter Milan , described the match as "tough".
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Original:  Inter must now prepare for a preliminary round match of the Champions' League against Shakhtar Donetsk on Wednesday.
Revised:  Inter now prepare for a preliminary round match of the Champions' League against Shakhtar Donetsk on Wednesday.
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Original: Pre-orders of the recently announced iPhone 4 began today, overwhelming Apple Inc.|
Revised: Pre-orders of the recently announced iPhone 4 began today, overwhelming 
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Original: The new iPhone 4 is coming to stores June 24.
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Original:  Some customers even reported that Apple had set a recording on their phone lines telling people to call back at a later time . Some angry buyers even tweeted about their experience.
Revised:  Some customers even reported that Apple had set a recording on their phone lines telling people to call back at a later time , and others even tweeted about their experience.
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Original: The ban  imposed on Australian parliamentary security officers using the word "mate" as a form of address has been overturned.
Revised: The ban was imposed on Australian parliamentary security officers using the word "mate" as a form of address has been overturned.
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Original:  The ban was previously reported here on wikinews 3 days ago.
Revised:  The ban was previously reported here on Wikinews 3 days ago.
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Original: Traralgon will host Moe  Saturday at the Traralgon Recreation Reserve and Showground instead of the originally scheduled Sunday.
Revised: Traralgon will host Moe on Saturday at the Traralgon Recreation Reserve and Showground instead of the originally scheduled Sunday.
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Original:  The contest wil be part of the Gippsland Football Leagues tenth round.
Revised:  The contest wil be part of the Gippsland Football League's tenth round.
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Original: Linnell was previously found  by a Melbourne Magistrate  to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI).
Revised: Linnell was previously found , by a Melbourne Magistrate to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI).
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Original: Linnell was previously found  by a Melbourne Magistrate  to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI).
Revised: Linnell was previously found by a Melbourne Magistrate , to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI).
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Original: Following being found guilty on three counts of perjury in testimony to the Victorian Police watchdog, County Court Judge Barbera Cottrell overturned the earlier conviction of ex-Police Media Director Stephen Linnell  Linnell was previously found, by a Melbourne Magistrate , to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI) .
Revised:  County Court Judge Barbera Cottrell overturned the earlier conviction of ex-Police Media Director Stephen Linnell Linnell was previously found, by a Melbourne Magistrate , to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI) .
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Original: Following being found guilty on three counts of perjury in testimony to the Victorian Police watchdog, County Court Judge Barbera Cottrell overturned the earlier conviction of ex-Police Media Director Stephen Linnell  Linnell was previously found, by a Melbourne Magistrate , to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI) .
Revised: Following being found guilty on three counts of perjury in testimony to the Victorian Police watchdog, County Court Judge Barbera Cottrell overturned earlier perjury convictions against ex-Police Media Director Stephen Linnell Linnell was previously found, by a Melbourne Magistrate , to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI) .
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Original: Following being found guilty on three counts of perjury in testimony to the Victorian Police watchdog, County Court Judge Barbera Cottrell overturned the earlier conviction of ex-Police Media Director Stephen Linnell  Linnell was previously found, by a Melbourne Magistrate , to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI) .
Revised: Following being found guilty on three counts of perjury in testimony to the Victorian Police watchdog, County Court Judge Barbera Cottrell overturned the earlier conviction of ex-Police Media Director Stephen Linnell . Linnell was previously found, by a Melbourne Magistrate , to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI) .
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Original: Following being found guilty on three counts of perjury in testimony to the Victorian Police watchdog, County Court Judge Barbera Cottrell overturned the earlier conviction of ex-Police Media Director Stephen Linnell  Linnell was previously found, by a Melbourne Magistrate , to be guilty of leaking confidential information pertaining to a murder investigation, on the basis of evidence presented to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI) .
Revised: Following being found guilty on three counts of perjury in testimony to the Victorian Police watchdog, County Court Judge Barbera Cottrell overturned the earlier conviction of ex-Police Media Director Stephen Linnell A Melbourne Magistrate accepted Linnell's guilty plea to three charges of purjury to the Office of Police Integrity (OPI) .
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Original:  The subsequent sentence was eight-months in  a corrective facility, suspended from the Police department  and fined AS$5,000.
Revised:  The subsequent sentence was eight-months in a corrective facility, suspension from the Police department and fined AS$5,000.
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Original:  The subsequent sentence was eight-months in  a corrective facility, suspended from the Police department  and fined AS$5,000.
Revised:  The subsequent sentence was eight-months in a corrective facility, suspended from the Police department , and fined AS$5,000.
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Original:  Given the dismissal of similar sentences against other notable members of the Police Department, including former Assistant Police Commissioner Noel Ashby and former union chief , Paul Mullett, Linnell appealed the judgement against him . Linnell made a statement saying, "I'm obviously pleased with today's decision . ..
Revised:  Given the dismissal of similar cases against superior members of the Police Department, including former Assistant Police Commissioner Noel Ashby and former union chief , Paul Mullett, Linnell appealed the judgement against him . Linnell made a statement saying, "I'm obviously pleased with today's decision . ..
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Original:  Given the dismissal of similar sentences against other notable members of the Police Department, including former Assistant Police Commissioner Noel Ashby and former union chief , Paul Mullett, Linnell appealed the judgement against him . Linnell made a statement saying, "I'm obviously pleased with today's decision . ..
Revised:  Given the dismissal of similar sentences against other notable members of the Police Department, including former Assistant Police Commissioner Noel Ashby and former union chief , Paul Mullett, Linnell appealed the judgement against him . "I'm obviously pleased with today's decision . ..
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Original:  Given the dismissal of similar sentences against other notable members of the Police Department, including former Assistant Police Commissioner Noel Ashby and former union chief , Paul Mullett, Linnell appealed the judgement against him . Linnell made a statement saying, "I'm obviously pleased with today's decision . ..
Revised:  Given the dismissal of similar sentences against other notable members of the Police Department, including former Assistant Police Commissioner Noel Ashby and former union chief , Paul Mullett, Linnell appealed the judgement against him . Linnell made a statement saying, "I'm obviously pleased with today's decision ," Linnell said in a statement. "
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Original:  As you can imagine, it has been a difficult time for me ".
Revised:  As you can imagine, it has been a difficult time for me ."
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Original:  However, due to some legal technicalities – such as the former head of the OPI investigation being unable to administer legal oaths – that evidence was considered inadmissible
Revised:  Legal technicalities – such as the former head of the OPI investigation being unable to administer legal oaths – that evidence was considered inadmissible
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Original:  However, due to some legal technicalities – such as the former head of the OPI investigation being unable to administer legal oaths – that evidence was considered inadmissible
Revised:  However, due to some legal technicalities – such as the former head of the OPI investigation being unable to administer legal oaths – resulted in the gathered evidence being inadmissible
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