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Original:   International Men’s Day is not officially recognized by the United Nations, which observes World Toilet Day on November URL Early background Calls for an International Men's Day have been noted since at least the 1960s, when many men were reported to "have been agitating privately to make 23 February International Men's Day, the equivalent of 8 March, which is International Women's Day"
Revised:  International Men’s Day is not officially recognised by the United Nations, which observes World Toilet Day on November URL Early background Calls for an International Men's Day have been noted since at least the 1960s, when many men were reported to "have been agitating privately to make 23 February International Men's Day, the equivalent of 8 March, which is International Women's Day"
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Original:  Formerly being the only country still observing the original February date, the Maltese AMR Committee voted in 2009 to begin observing the day on 19 November in order to be synchronized with the rest of the world.
Revised:  Formerly being the only country still observing the original February date, the Maltese AMR Committee voted in 2009 to begin observing the day on 19 November in order to be synchronised with the rest of the world.
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Original:  Numerous other organisations hosted observations including the Men's Shed Steering Committee in Rockhampton,  the Community Resource center in Ulladulla, the Regional Health Service in Koo Wee Rup, and Dads on the Air radio programme in Sydney which hosted an hour-long programme discussing IMD with a panel of international coordinators of the event.
Revised:  Numerous other organisations hosted observations including the Men's Shed Steering Committee in Rockhampton, the 
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Original:  International Men's Day Special, DOTA Radio 16 Nov 2008 In honour of men and boys on the occasion of IMD 2014, Liz Behjat addressed the Western Australian Legislative Council on the topic of men's lives and issues.
Revised:  International Men's Day In honour of men and boys on the occasion of IMD 2014, Liz Behjat addressed the Western Australian Legislative Council on the topic of men's lives and issues.
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Original:  Liz Behjat MLC speech on International Men's Day, 20/Nov/ 2014 – p8456-8464 India The inaugural celebration of IMD in India was organized by the leading Indian Men's rights organization Indian Family on 19 November 2007.8 March to be International Men's day : Hindustan Times News, (article) 2007 The date of 19 November was accepted based on the fact that Australia and the West Indies (Jamaica, Trinidad and Tobago) were already observing IMD on that date.
Revised:  Liz Behjat MLC speech on International Men's Day, 20/Nov/ 2014 India The inaugural celebration of IMD in India was organized by the leading Indian Men's rights organization Indian Family on 19 November 2007.8 March to be International Men's day : Hindustan Times News, (article) 2007 The date of 19 November was accepted based on the fact that Australia and the West Indies (Jamaica, Trinidad and Tobago) were already observing IMD on that date.
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Original: International Men's Day – 19 November 2008, Press Release of Save the Indian Family, Thursday, 13 November 2008 In 2009, India received the first corporate sponsorship of the International Men's Day with menswear brand Allen Solly deciding to create promotional offers on IMD, and HBO deciding to screen male-positive movies in its " Men in Black " series on 19 November.
Revised: International Men's Day – 19 November 2008, Press Release of In 2009, India received the first corporate sponsorship of the International Men's Day with menswear brand Allen Solly deciding to create promotional offers on IMD, and HBO deciding to screen male-positive movies in its " Men in Black " series on 19 November.
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Original: International Men's Day – 19 November 2008, Press Release of Save the Indian Family, Thursday, 13 November 2008 In 2009, India received the first corporate sponsorship of the International Men's Day with menswear brand Allen Solly deciding to create promotional offers on IMD, and HBO deciding to screen male-positive movies in its " Men in Black " series on 19 November.
Revised: International Men's Day – 19 November 2008, Press Release of Save the Indian Family, Thursday, 13 November 2008 the International Men's Day with menswear brand Allen Solly deciding to create promotional offers on IMD, and HBO deciding to screen male-positive movies in its " Men in Black " series on 19 November.
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Original: SIF Karnataka and Regal Hospital discussing Prostate Cancer in men SIF Karnataka #HealthyHim campaign covered by Radio Mirchi In [ [  2017 and 2018, among many other awareness activities, the volunteers organized a bike rally to Nandi Hills, India and celebrated International Men 's Day with more than 40 , 000 people present.
Revised: SIF Karnataka and Regal Hospital discussing Prostate Cancer in men SIF Karnataka #HealthyHim campaign covered by Radio Mirchi In [ [ 2017 , 000 people present.
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Original: SIF Karnataka and Regal Hospital discussing Prostate Cancer in men SIF Karnataka #HealthyHim campaign covered by Radio Mirchi In [ [  2017 and 2018, among many other awareness activities, the volunteers organized a bike rally to Nandi Hills, India and celebrated International Men 's Day with more than 40 , 000 people present.
Revised: SIF Karnataka and Regal Hospital discussing Prostate Cancer in men SIF Karnataka #HealthyHim campaign covered by Radio Mirchi In [ [ 2017 and 2018, among many other awareness activities, the volunteers organized a bike rally to Nandi Hills, India and celebrated International Men 's Day with more than 40 , 
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Original:  Daaman Welfare Society%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Trust, another prominent NGO working on the same principals under the Save Indian Family Movement, also celebrates International Men's Day every year.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Trust, another prominent NGO working on the same principals under the Save Indian Family Movement, also celebrates International Men's Day every year.
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Original:  Ever since then, the topic about " Men's Day " has been discussed every August on the Internet.
Revised:  Ever since then, the topic about " Men's Day " 
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Original:  In Hong Kong in 2010 special observances of International Men's Day occurred on 19 November, with the theme " Blessed Are The Men " . All men were invited to ride for free in the city's Ngong Ping 360 Tung Chung cable cars for a round-trip on 19 November.
Revised:  Positive Male Role Models " Blessed Are The Men " . All men were invited to ride for free in the city's Ngong Ping 360 Tung Chung cable cars for a round-trip on 19 November.
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Original:  2012 International Men's Day was celebrated during the weeks before the observance of 2012 International Men's Day on 12 October 2012.
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Original:  United Kingdom In the UK, the responsibility for the International Men 's Day platform resides with the Men and BoysCoalition charity, who run the  International Men's Day website.
Revised:  Africa International Men's Day website.
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Original:  England In England (and the UK) the event was inaugurated in 2008 by University of Kent students who celebrated International Men's Day on the university campus on 19 November 2008.
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Original:  Northern Ireland In Northern Ireland 2010 Deputy Mayor of Newry and Mourne Council, Cllr Karen Mc Kevitt launched the Magnet Young Men's Health Event, ' on Friday 19 November.
Revised:  In Northern Ireland 2010 Deputy Mayor of Newry and Mourne Council, Cllr Karen Mc Kevitt launched the Magnet Young Men's Health Event, ' on Friday 19 November.
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Original:  Northern Ireland In Northern Ireland 2010 Deputy Mayor of Newry and Mourne Council, Cllr Karen Mc Kevitt launched the Magnet Young Men's Health Event, ' on Friday 19 November.
Revised:  Northern Ireland On 19 November.
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Original:  Jim Leishman, men's health coordinator, NHS Forth Valley said: " This event was a huge opportunity to drive through improvements in men's health in Scotland."
Revised:  Jim Leishman, men's health coordinator, NHS Forth Valley said: " 
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Original:  Romania As of 19 November 2016, Romania will officially celebrate the " national men's day".
Revised:  On 19 November 2016, Romania will officially celebrate the " national men's day".
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Original:  Malta South Africa Hungary In November 2009, writer Marie Clarence organized the inaugural IMD celebration for Hungary.
Revised:  Malta Hungary In November 2009, writer Marie Clarence organized the inaugural IMD celebration for Hungary.
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Original:  Positive Men's Movement of South Africa (POMESA) in partnership with South African Network of People Living with HIV and AIDS (NAPWA)Network of Africa People Living with HIV and AIDS for Southern Africa Region organized the first Annual International Men's Day event.
Revised:  Positive Men's Movement of South Africa (POMESA) in partnership with South African Network of People Living with HIV and AIDS (NAPWA)Network of Africa People Living with HIV and AIDS for Southern Africa Region organised the first Annual International Men's Day event.
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Original:  As the December date was not celebrated by other participating countries, discussions were undertaken within both organizations and in May 2009 the secretary general of NAPWA and POMESA Nkululeko Nxesi announced that the National Boards of both organizations have agreed to celebrate the Men's day on the same dates with other countries beginning on 19 November 2009 and in each year thereafter on the same date.
Revised:  As the December date was not celebrated by other participating countries, discussions were undertaken within both organisations and in May 2009 the secretary general of NAPWA and POMESA Nkululeko Nxesi announced that the National Boards of both organizations have agreed to celebrate the Men's day on the same dates with other countries beginning on 19 November 2009 and in each year thereafter on the same date.
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Original:  As the December date was not celebrated by other participating countries, discussions were undertaken within both organizations and in May 2009 the secretary general of NAPWA and POMESA Nkululeko Nxesi announced that the National Boards of both organizations have agreed to celebrate the Men's day on the same dates with other countries beginning on 19 November 2009 and in each year thereafter on the same date.
Revised:  As the December date was not celebrated by other participating countries, discussions were undertaken within both organizations and in May 2009 the secretary general of NAPWA and POMESA Nkululeko Nxesi announced that the National Boards of both organisations have agreed to celebrate the Men's day on the same dates with other countries beginning on 19 November 2009 and in each year thereafter on the same date.
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Original:  The meeting was organized and led by the National Association of People Living With HIV and AIDS (NAPWA) to highlight the need for treatment access to medication and prevention.
Revised:  The meeting was organised and led by the National Association of People Living With HIV and AIDS (NAPWA) to highlight the need for treatment access to medication and prevention.
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Original: News – Ghana Fatherhood Initiative Foundation%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tanzania On Saturday 19 November 2011, Youth Challenge International (YCI), in partnership with local and international organizations celebrated International Men's Day for the first time in Arusha and Morogoro, Tanzania.
Revised: News – Ghana Fatherhood Initiative Foundation%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tanzania On Saturday 19 November 2011, Youth Challenge International (YCI), in partnership with local and international organizations celebrated International Men's Day for the first time in Arusha and Morogoro, Tanzania.
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Original: News – Ghana Fatherhood Initiative Foundation%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tanzania On Saturday 19 November 2011, Youth Challenge International (YCI), in partnership with local and international organizations celebrated International Men's Day for the first time in Arusha and Morogoro, Tanzania.
Revised: News – Ghana Fatherhood Initiative Foundation%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tanzania On Saturday 19 November 2011, Youth Challenge International (YCI), in partnership with local and international organisations celebrated International Men's Day for the first time in Arusha and Morogoro, Tanzania.
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Original:  To celebrate the event in Morogoro, volunteers, along with partner organization Faraja Trust Fund, held a soccer tournament on with 8 local teams.
Revised:  To celebrate the event in Morogoro, volunteers, along with partner organisation Faraja Trust Fund, held a soccer tournament on with 8 local teams.
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Original:  YCI and Faraja provided an on-site HIV testing centre, a DJ with music and dancing throughout the day, and drama group performances on the key objectives of International Men's Day.
Revised:  YCI and Faraja provided an on-site HIV testing centre, a disc jockey with music and dancing throughout the day, and drama group performances on the key objectives of International Men's Day.
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Original:  International Men's Day is an opportunity for people everywhere of good will to appreciate and celebrate the men in their life and the contributions they make to society for the greater good of all hence it being important for us to celebrate this day equally as we did with The International Women's Day."Zimbabwe marks Men's Day, NewsDay 22 November Botswana   International Men's Day was inaugurated in Botswana in 2011 by coordinator Geneuvieve Twala.
Revised:  International Men's Day is an opportunity for people everywhere of good will to appreciate and celebrate the men in their life and the contributions they make to society for the greater good of all hence it being important for us to celebrate this day equally as we did with The International Women's Day."Zimbabwe marks Men's Day, NewsDay 22 November America International Men's Day was inaugurated in Botswana in 2011 by coordinator Geneuvieve Twala.
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Original:  Standard Chartered Bank Acting CEO Mr Michael Wiegand opened the event by sharing best practices that Standard Chartered Bank uses to address legitimate issues faced by male employees, including the fact that Standard Chartered Bank       ]]  is the first company in Botswana to offer paternity leave which, he stated, made their male employees feel valued and that they were working for a 21st-century organization.
Revised:  Standard Chartered Bank Acting CEO Mr Michael Wiegand opened the event by sharing best practices that Standard Chartered Bank uses to address legitimate issues faced by male employees, including the fact that Standard Chartered Bank Cuba ]] is the first company in Botswana to offer paternity leave which, he stated, made their male employees feel valued and that they were working for a 21st-century organization.
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Original:  Standard Chartered Bank Acting CEO Mr Michael Wiegand opened the event by sharing best practices that Standard Chartered Bank uses to address legitimate issues faced by male employees, including the fact that Standard Chartered Bank       ]]  is the first company in Botswana to offer paternity leave which, he stated, made their male employees feel valued and that they were working for a 21st-century organization.
Revised:  Standard Chartered Bank Acting CEO Mr Michael Wiegand opened the event by sharing best practices that Standard Chartered Bank uses to address legitimate issues faced by male employees, including the fact that Standard Chartered Bank Jamaica ]] is the first company in Botswana to offer paternity leave which, he stated, made their male employees feel valued and that they were working for a 21st-century organization.
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Original:  Seychelles On    19    November 2012, Government Minister Vincent Meriton declared this year the first that IMDhas been celebrated at a National Government level.
Revised:  Asia 19 November 2012, Government Minister Vincent Meriton declared this year the first that IMDhas been celebrated at a National Government level.
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Original:  Seychelles On    19    November 2012, Government Minister Vincent Meriton declared this year the first that IMDhas been celebrated at a National Government level.
Revised:  Seychelles On 19 India November 2012, Government Minister Vincent Meriton declared this year the first that IMDhas been celebrated at a National Government level.
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Original:    "  Burundi On  19   November 2012, Burundi joined the world for the first time in celebrating the International Men's Day , as Association for the Protection of the Man in Distress (APHD Burundi) denounced violence inflicted to men by their wives.
Revised:  Pakistan " Burundi On 19 November 2012, Burundi joined the world for the first time in celebrating the International Men's Day , as Association for the Protection of the Man in Distress (APHD Burundi) denounced violence inflicted to men by their wives.
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Original:    "  Burundi On  19   November 2012, Burundi joined the world for the first time in celebrating the International Men's Day , as Association for the Protection of the Man in Distress (APHD Burundi) denounced violence inflicted to men by their wives.
Revised:  " Singapore 19 November 2012, Burundi joined the world for the first time in celebrating the International Men's Day , as Association for the Protection of the Man in Distress (APHD Burundi) denounced violence inflicted to men by their wives.
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Original:  Vincent Bukuru, chairman of the APHD-Burundi said, " Violence on men rises when the man loses his job, during the end of year festivities (Christmas and New Year) and at the International      Women's Day (8 March).
Revised:  Vincent Bukuru, chairman of the APHD-Burundi said, " Violence on men rises when the man loses his job, during the end of year festivities (Christmas and New Year) and at the International Denmark Women's Day (8 March).
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Original:  " Burundi marks   Men's Day amid condemnation of violence against men The New Times, Rwanda's First Daily Bukuru called on the Burundian government to conduct a national investigation on types and origins of violence that men are facing, their consequences and their gravity which he stated is a violation of human rights   .
Revised:  " Burundi marks France Men's Day amid condemnation of violence against men The New Times, Rwanda's First Daily Bukuru called on the Burundian government to conduct a national investigation on types and origins of violence that men are facing, their consequences and their gravity which he stated is a violation of human rights .
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Original:  " Burundi marks   Men's Day amid condemnation of violence against men The New Times, Rwanda's First Daily Bukuru called on the Burundian government to conduct a national investigation on types and origins of violence that men are facing, their consequences and their gravity which he stated is a violation of human rights   .
Revised:  " Burundi marks Men's Day amid condemnation of violence against men The New Times, Rwanda's First Daily Bukuru called on the Burundian government to conduct a national investigation on types and origins of violence that men are facing, their consequences and their gravity which he stated is a violation of human rights Hungary .
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Original:  Ireland To Celebrate  International Men's Day on Thursday 19 November 2009, Irish broadcaster Newstalk devoted a day-long show to men.
Revised:  Ireland International Men's Day on Thursday 19 November 2009, Irish broadcaster Newstalk devoted a day-long show to men.
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Original:  Ireland To Celebrate  International Men's Day on Thursday 19 November 2009, Irish broadcaster Newstalk devoted a day-long show to men.
Revised:  Ireland To Celebrate To celebrate International Men's Day on Thursday 19 November 2009, Irish broadcaster Newstalk devoted a day-long show to men.
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Original: International Men's day at Isle of Man College The organization emphasised the 2012 theme which highlighted World Health Organization figures showing that every year over half a million people die from violence and 83\% of them are men and boys, and that a similar proportion of the global burden of disease (ill-health, disability or early death) from violence is borne by males.
Revised: International Men's day at Isle of Man College The organisation emphasised the 2012 theme which highlighted World Health Organization figures showing that every year over half a million people die from violence and 83\% of them are men and boys, and that a similar proportion of the global burden of disease (ill-health, disability or early death) from violence is borne by males.
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Original: College focuses on men for special day , IOMToday, 22 November 2012 Canada Groups in three cities in Canada are known to have marked this occasion at least once: On 19  November 2009, directors of the Vancouver Manology Program held an all day event to mark the beginning of the Vancouver Men's Centre.
Revised: College focuses on men for special day , IOMToday, 22 November 2012 Italy November 2009, directors of the Vancouver Manology Program held an all day event to mark the beginning of the Vancouver Men's Centre.
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Original: College focuses on men for special day , IOMToday, 22 November 2012 Canada Groups in three cities in Canada are known to have marked this occasion at least once: On 19  November 2009, directors of the Vancouver Manology Program held an all day event to mark the beginning of the Vancouver Men's Centre.
Revised: College focuses on men for special day , IOMToday, 22 November 2012 Canada Groups in three cities in Canada are known to have marked this occasion at least once: On 19 In November 2009, directors of the Vancouver Manology Program held an all day event to mark the beginning of the Vancouver Men's Centre.
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Original: The Laurel Centre Winnipeg: Men's resource centre open house  International Men's Day 19 November, Calgary Examiner, 13 November 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Denmark Men in Denmark formed a group which planned to hold their own International Men's Day celebration on 19 November 2010.
Revised: The Laurel Centre Winnipeg: Men's resource centre open house Malta International Men's Day 19 November, Calgary Examiner, 13 November 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Denmark Men in Denmark formed a group which planned to hold their own International Men's Day celebration on 19 November 2010.
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Original: The Laurel Centre Winnipeg: Men's resource centre open house  International Men's Day 19 November, Calgary Examiner, 13 November 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Denmark Men in Denmark formed a group which planned to hold their own International Men's Day celebration on 19 November 2010.
Revised: The Laurel Centre Winnipeg: Men's resource centre open house International Men's Day %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Denmark Men in Denmark formed a group which planned to hold their own International Men's Day celebration on 19 November 2010.
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