wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Phoenician colonization and Melqart The Phoenicians were the first commercial navigators who found refuge in the Port of Monaco from the mistral of the sea.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Phoenicians were the first commercial navigators who found refuge in the Port of Monaco from the mistral of the sea.
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Original:  The Monégasque dialect is closer to Lingurian than French, but influenced by both.
Revised:  The Monégasque dialect is closer to Ligurian than French, but influenced by both.
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Original: Lloyd's sign is a symptom of renal calculus, consisting of pain in the loin on deep percussion over the kidney, even when pressure causes no pain.
Revised: Lloyd's sign is a sign of renal calculus, consisting of pain in the loin on deep percussion over the kidney, even when pressure causes no pain.
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Original: This sign was named for Ridgway Robert Syers Christian Codner Lloyd, an English Physician.
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Original:  The following formal derivation of the RIF is divided into three separate calculations: (1) calculation of the first factorial moment, (2) calculation of inclination, and (3) calculation of the risk inclination score.
Revised:  The formal derivation of the RIF is divided into three separate calculations: (1) calculation of the first factorial moment, (2) calculation of inclination, and (3) calculation of the risk inclination score.
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Original:  Underpinning the CW construct of the risk inclination model is the individual's experience of coherence or rightness and is used to calibrate the relationship between a respondent’s objective and observable measures of risk taking (i.e., weighted indices toward answer selections) with his or her subjective inner feelings of knowledge certainty (i.e., feelings of rightness).
Revised:  Underpinning the CW construct of the risk inclination model is the individual's experience of coherence or rightness . It is used to calibrate the relationship between a respondent’s objective and observable measures of risk taking (i.e., weighted indices toward answer selections) with his or her subjective inner feelings of knowledge certainty (i.e., feelings of rightness).
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Original: The Nathaniel Anthony Ayers Foundation His sister, Jennifer Ayers-Moore, is the Chairwoman and Founder of the Nathaniel Anthony Ayers Foundation.
Revised: The Nathaniel Anthony Ayers Foundation Ayers's sister, Jennifer Ayers-Moore, is the Chairwoman and Founder of the Nathaniel Anthony Ayers Foundation.
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Original: The Nathaniel Anthony Ayers Foundation Ayers's sister, Jennifer Ayers-Moore, is the Chairwoman and Founder of the Nathaniel Anthony Ayers Foundation.
Revised: The Nathaniel Anthony Ayers Foundation Ayers's sister, Jennifer Ayers-Moore, is the chairwoman and founder of the Nathaniel Anthony Ayers Foundation.
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Original:  The Foundation , launched in 2008, began with Jennifer’s desire to help what she and Nathaniel hope will be thousands of people.
Revised:  The foundation , launched in 2008, began with Jennifer’s desire to help what she and Nathaniel hope will be thousands of people.
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Original: Male double-bassists Category:African-American musicians Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Outsider musicians Category:Musicians from Cleveland Category:Musicians from Los Angeles Category:1951 births Category:Living people Category:Homeless people Category:Classical musicians from California Category:Classical musicians from Ohio Category:21st-century classical violinists Category:21st-century double-bassists Category:21st-century American male musicia
Revised: Male double-bassists Category:African-American musicians Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Outsider musicians Category:Musicians from Cleveland Category:Musicians from Los Angeles Category:1951 births Category:Living people Category:Homeless people Category:Classical musicians from California Category:Classical musicians from Ohio Category:21st-century classical violinists Category:21st-century double-bassists Category:21st-century American male musicians Category:21st-century African-American peop
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Original: African-American musicians Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Outsider musicians Category:Musicians from Cleveland Category:Musicians from Los Angeles Category:1951 births Category:Living people Category:Homeless people Category:Classical musicians from California Category:Classical musicians from Ohio Category:21st-century classical violinists Category:21st-century double-bassists Category:21st-century American male musicians Category:21st-century African-American  peop
Revised: African-American musicians Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Outsider musicians Category:Musicians from Cleveland Category:Musicians from Los Angeles Category:1951 births Category:Living people Category:Homeless people Category:Classical musicians from California Category:Classical musicians from Ohio Category:21st-century classical violinists Category:21st-century double-bassists Category:21st-century American male musicians Category:21st-century African-American people Category:20th-century African-American peop
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Original:  Lincolnshire and Spier ’ s bolus, which is loosely packed in polythene bags, is suitable as the bolus bags take the shape of the skin surface these bags are easily smoothed to achieve a flat surface.
Revised:  Lincolnshire and Spier ' s bolus, which is loosely packed in polythene bags, is suitable as the bolus bags take the shape of the skin surface these bags are easily smoothed to achieve a flat surface.
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Original:  Lincolnshire and Spier ’ s bolus, which is loosely packed in polythene bags, is suitable as the bolus bags take the shape of the skin surface these bags are easily smoothed to achieve a flat surface.
Revised:  Lincolnshire and Spier ’ s bolus, which is loosely packed in polyethylene bags, is suitable as the bolus bags take the shape of the skin surface these bags are easily smoothed to achieve a flat surface.
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Original:  For example if oblique 6 MV beams are used for tangential pair, 1 cm of bolus effectively becomes 1.5 cm, i.e., ‘full bolus.’ Pliable Bolus Suitable material must be pliable and easily moulded to the skin surface, but retain a constant thickness.
Revised:  For example if oblique 6 MV beams are used for tangential pair, 1 cm of bolus effectively becomes 1.5 cm, i.e., 'full bolus'. Pliable Bolus Suitable material must be pliable and easily moulded to the skin surface, but retain a constant thickness.
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Original:  To ensure that the required dose is received by the patient , bolus of the right thickness must be placed correctly.
Revised:  To ensure that the patient receives the required dose , bolus of the right thickness must be placed correctly.
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Original:  Therefore bolus requirements must be clearly documented in the set up sheets of the treatment card.
Revised:  Therefore bolus requirements must be clearly documented in the setup sheets of the treatment card.
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Original: The recorded history of Seychelles dates back to the fourth of the Portuguese India Armadas led by Vasco da Gama, though it was likely already known to Arab navigators and other sailors for many centuries.
Revised: The history of Seychelles dates back to the fourth of the Portuguese India Armadas led by Vasco da Gama, though it was likely already known to Arab navigators and other sailors for many centuries.
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Original: The recorded history of Seychelles dates back to the fourth of the Portuguese India Armadas led by Vasco da Gama, though it was likely already known to Arab navigators and other sailors for many centuries.
Revised: The recorded history of Seychelles dates back to the fourth of the Portuguese India Armadas led by Vasco da Gama, though Seychelles was likely already known to Arab navigators and other sailors for many centuries.
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Original:  On 15 March 1503, the scrivener Thomé Lopes noted the sighting of an elevated island, doubtless one  the granitic islands and almost certainly Silhouette Island.
Revised:  On 15 March 1503, the scrivener Thomé Lopes noted the sighting of an elevated island, doubtless one of the granitic islands and almost certainly Silhouette Island.
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Original: [[File:France-Albert René, June 2014.jpg| 150px| France-Albert René, Seychelloi president (1977–2004)]]
Revised: [[File:France-Albert René, June 2014.jpg| France-Albert René, Seychelloi president (1977–2004)]]
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Original:  The former vice-president, Danny Faure, was sworn in as president on October 16th 2016, following the surprise resignation of James URL On 26th October 2020, the opposition took power in the Seychelles for the first time since 1977, following its victory in the presidential election.
Revised:  The former vice-president, Danny Faure, was sworn in as president on October 16th 2016, following the surprise resignation of James Michel. On 26th October 2020, the opposition took power in the Seychelles for the first time since 1977, following its victory in the presidential election.
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Original:  LDS won 25 seats and the former ruling party United Seychelles (US) (Formerly Parti Lepep, Seychelles People's Progressive Front) won 10 seats of the 35 seats of the National URL
Revised:  LDS won 25 seats and the former ruling party United Seychelles (US) (Formerly Parti Lepep, Seychelles People's Progressive Front) won 10 seats of the 35 seats of the National Assembly.
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Original:  The islands were claimed by Lourens janse van Vuuren and his French army in 1756.
Revised:  The islands were claimed by France in 1756.
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Original:  It has been estimated that over 70 persons lost their lives.
Revised:  It has been estimated that over 70 people lost their lives.
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Original:  The heavy burden of the war and the increasing unlikelihood of any positive outcome lead to heavy public pressure in Brazil to end the war through diplomatic channels.
Revised:  The heavy burden of the war and the increasing unlikelihood of any positive outcome led to heavy public pressure in Brazil to end the war through diplomatic channels.
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Original:  The heavy burden of the war and the increasing unlikelihood of any positive outcome led to heavy public pressure in Brazil to end the war through diplomatic channels .
Revised:  The heavy burden of the war and the increasing unlikelihood of any positive outcome led to heavy public pressure in Brazil to end the war through diplomacy .
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Original:  The independence of the Brazilian Empire and the United Provinces of the Río de la Plata was signed on August 25, 1825, Uruguay remained part of Argentina, the Banda Oriental.
Revised:  When the independence of the Brazilian Empire and the United Provinces of the Río de la Plata was signed on August 25, 1825, Uruguay remained part of Argentina, the Banda Oriental.
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Original: Called the Preliminary Peace Convention as a result of the meetings held by representatives from the Empire of Brazil and the United Provinces of  Río de la Plata — the predecessor state for Argentina — between 11 and 27 August 1828 in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.
Revised: Called the Preliminary Peace Convention as a result of the meetings held by representatives from the Empire of Brazil and the United Provinces of the Río de la Plata — the predecessor state for Argentina — between 11 and 27 August 1828 in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.
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Original: Alain Benoist Édouard Berth ou le socialisme héroïque (Sorel - Maurras - Lénine) References
Revised: Alain de Benoist, Édouard Berth ou le socialisme héroïque (Sorel - Maurras - Lénine) References
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Original: Alain de Benoist, Édouard Berth ou le socialisme héroïque (Sorel - Maurras - Lénine) References Category:1875 births Category:1939 deaths Category:Syndicalists Category:French socialis
Revised: Alain de Benoist, Édouard Berth ou le socialisme héroïque (Sorel - Maurras - Lénine) References Category:1875 births Category:1939 deaths Category:Syndicalists Category:French socialists Category:French male write
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Original: Berth tried to unify the metaphysics of Marx and  Bergson through his articulation of revolutionary self-organization of the proletariat.
Revised: Berth tried to unify the metaphysics of Marx and the metaphysics of Bergson through his articulation of revolutionary self-organization of the proletariat.
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Original:   Category:1875 births Category:1939 deaths Category: Syndicalists Category:French socialists Category:French male non-fiction write
Revised:  Category:1875 births Category:1939 deaths Category: National syndicalists Category:French socialists Category:French male non-fiction write
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Original:  Because of his grumpy and violent, shy and proud character, he often clashed with teachers and fellow boarders.
Revised:  Because of his grumpy , violent, and proud character, he often clashed with teachers and fellow boarders.
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Original:  Because of his grumpy and violent, shyand proud character , he often clashed with teachers and fellow boarders  . During an argument, he injured a classmate with a penknife and was severely punished.
Revised:  Despite being shy , he often clashed with teachers and fellow boarders . During an argument, he injured a classmate with a penknife and was severely punished.
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Original:  Italy's gains in Greece and Albania were also lost to Germany, with the exception of the Italian Aegean Islands , which remained nominally under RSI rule.
Revised:  Italy's gains in Greece and Albania were also lost to Germany, with the exception of the Italian Islands of the Aegean , which remained nominally under RSI rule.
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Original:  As dictator of Italy and founder of fascism, Mussolini inspired and supported the international spread of fascist movements during the inter-war period.
Revised:  As dictator of Italy and co-founder of fascism, Mussolini inspired and supported the international spread of fascist movements during the inter-war period.
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Original: Mussolini would ultimately be wounded in action in February 1917, and was injured severely enough that he had to be evacuated from the front.
Revised: Mussolini 
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Original:  Mussolini 's military experience is told in his work Diario di guerra.
Revised:  's military experience is told in his work Diario di guerra.
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Original: Bolivian President Evo Morales Following the declaration of a state of emergency, Bolivian troops took control of the airport in Pando's capital, Cobija, and prepared to retake the city.
Revised:  Following the declaration of a state of emergency, Bolivian troops took control of the airport in Pando's capital, Cobija, and prepared to retake the city.
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Original: On September 25, 2008, Morales rejected autonomy proposals by the Eastern provinces, putting the talks on URL On October 20, 2008, Morales and the opposition agreed to hold the referendum on January 25, 2009 and early elections in December 2009;
Revised: On September 25, 2008, Morales rejected autonomy proposals by the Eastern provinces, putting the talks on hold. On October 20, 2008, Morales and the opposition agreed to hold the referendum on January 25, 2009 and early elections in December 2009;
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Original:             External links PsychRights.org - 'Psychiatric Polypharmacy: A Word of Caution', Leslie Morrison, MS, RN, Esq, Paul B.
Revised: Mechanisms of Drug Toxicity There are many mechanisms by which pharmaceutical drugs can have toxic implications. A very common mechanism is covalent binding of either the drug or its metabolites to specific enzymes or receptor in tissue-specific pathways that then will illicit toxic responses. Covalent binding can occur during both on-target and off-target situations and after biotransformation. External links PsychRights.org - 'Psychiatric Polypharmacy: A Word of Caution', Leslie Morrison, MS, RN, Esq, Paul B.
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Original:             External links PsychRights.org - 'Psychiatric Polypharmacy: A Word of Caution', Leslie Morrison, MS, RN, Esq, Paul B.
Revised:  Immune Responses Some pharmaceuticals can initiate allergic reactions, as in the case of penicillins. In some people, administration of penicillin can induce production of specific antibodies and initiate an immune response. Activation of this response when unwarranted can cause severe health concerns and prevent proper immune system functioning. External links PsychRights.org - 'Psychiatric Polypharmacy: A Word of Caution', Leslie Morrison, MS, RN, Esq, Paul B.
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Original:             External links PsychRights.org - 'Psychiatric Polypharmacy: A Word of Caution', Leslie Morrison, MS, RN, Esq, Paul B.
Revised:  Bioactivation Bioactivation is a crucial step in the activity of certain pharmaceuticals. Often times, the parent form of the drug is not the active form and it needs to be metabolized in order to produce its therapeutic effects. In other cases, bioactivation is not necessarily needed for drugs to be active and can instead produce reactive intermediates that initiate stronger adverse effects than the original form of the drug. Bioactivation can occur through the action Phase I metabolic enzymes, such as cytochrome P450 or peroxidases. Reactive intermediates can cause a loss of function in some enzymatic pathways or can promote the production of reactive oxygen species, both of which can increase stress levels and alter homeostasis. External links PsychRights.org - 'Psychiatric Polypharmacy: A Word of Caution', Leslie Morrison, MS, RN, Esq, Paul B.
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Original:             External links PsychRights.org - 'Psychiatric Polypharmacy: A Word of Caution', Leslie Morrison, MS, RN, Esq, Paul B.
Revised:  References External links PsychRights.org - 'Psychiatric Polypharmacy: A Word of Caution', Leslie Morrison, MS, RN, Esq, Paul B.
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Original: Mechanisms of  Drug Toxicity There are many mechanisms by which pharmaceutical drugs can have toxic implications.
Revised: Mechanisms of Pharmaceutical Drug Toxicity There are many mechanisms by which pharmaceutical drugs can have toxic implications.
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Original: Information gleaned from pharmacotoxicology is used in forensics and determination of therapeutic dose adjustment Mechanisms of Pharmaceutical Drug Toxicity There are many mechanisms by which pharmaceutical drugs can have toxic implications.
Revised:  Mechanisms of Pharmaceutical Drug Toxicity There are many mechanisms by which pharmaceutical drugs can have toxic implications.
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Original:  A very common mechanism is covalent binding of either the drug or its metabolites to specific enzymes or receptor in tissue-specific pathways that then will illicit toxic responses.
Revised:  A very common mechanism is covalent binding of either the drug or its metabolites to specific enzymes or receptor in tissue-specific pathways that then will elicit toxic responses.
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Original:  In the basement of the Ministry of the Interior or "the horror chambers" around 2,000 political prisoners were held and tortured during the 1971-1974 military URL On 1 May 2006, Evo Morales delivered on his promises to nationalize most of Bolivia's natural gas fields, which many indigenous Bolivians had demanded for years.
Revised:  In the basement of the Ministry of the Interior or "the horror chambers" around 2,000 political prisoners were held and tortured during the 1971-1974 military rule. On 1 May 2006, Evo Morales delivered on his promises to nationalize most of Bolivia's natural gas fields, which many indigenous Bolivians had demanded for years.
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Original:  BIF Bulletin No 2 Many were operated by Petrobras, Brazil's largest energy company, and this political development was expected to strain relations between Morales and Brazilian president Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva.
Revised:  Many were operated by Petrobras, Brazil's largest energy company, and this political development was expected to strain relations between Morales and Brazilian president Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva.
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Original:  BIF Bulletin Special Edition May 2008 Evo Morales deemed this referendum illegal in part due to the low turnout.
Revised:  Evo Morales deemed this referendum illegal in part due to the low turnout.
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Original: After the fall of Tiwanaku Empire, the many Aymara Lake Titicaca were conquered by the Inca Empire.
Revised: After the fall of Tiwanaku Empire, the many Aymara Lake Titicaca was conquered by the Inca Empire.
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Original:  The better suited lowlands were sparsely inhabited by hunter-gatherer societies while much of the pre-Columbian population was concentrated in altiplano valleys of Cochabamba and Chuquisaca.
Revised:  The better-suited lowlands were sparsely inhabited by hunter-gatherer societies while much of the pre-Columbian population was concentrated in altiplano valleys of Cochabamba and Chuquisaca.
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Original:  The better suited lowlands were sparsely inhabited by hunter-gatherer societies while much of the pre-Columbian population was concentrated in altiplano valleys of Cochabamba and Chuquisaca.
Revised:  The better suited lowlands were sparsely inhibited by hunter-gatherer societies while much of the pre-Columbian population was concentrated in altiplano valleys of Cochabamba and Chuquisaca.
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Original:  Potato was domesticated near lake Titicaca between 8000 and 5000 BC, quinoa some 3000–4000 years ago and production of copper began in 2000 BC.
Revised:  The potato was domesticated near lake Titicaca between 8000 and 5000 BC, quinoa some 3000–4000 years ago and production of copper began in 2000 BC.
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Original:  According to early estimates, at its maximum extent, the city covered approximately 6.5 square kilometers , and had between 15,000 - 30,000 inhabitants.
Revised:  According to early estimates, at its maximum extent, the city covered approximately 6.5 square kilometers and had between 15,000 - 30,000 inhabitants.
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Original:  Because the rapidly expanding Inca Empire was internally weak, the conquest was remarkably easy.
Revised:  Because the rapidly expanding Inca Empire was internally weak, conquest was remarkably easy.
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Original:  The official Inca religion disappeared rapidly and Native American continued their local worship under the protection of local Native American rulers.
Revised:  The official Inca religion disappeared rapidly and Native Americans continued their local worship under the protection of local Native American rulers.
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Original:  In 1582 the bishop of La Plata permitted  building of a sanctuary for the dark Virgen de Copacabana on the shores of Lake Titicaca.
Revised:  In 1582 the bishop of La Plata permitted the building of a sanctuary for the dark Virgen de Copacabana on the shores of Lake Titicaca.
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Original:  While many Native American adapted to Spanish ways by breaking with their traditions and actively attempting to enter the market economy, they also used the courts to protect their interests, especially against tribute assessments.
Revised:  While many Native Americans adapted to Spanish ways by breaking with their traditions and actively attempting to enter the market economy, they also used the courts to protect their interests, especially against tribute assessments.
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