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Original: People involved in open source products from across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference to present to others a variety of research which is relevant to the open source community.
Revised: People involved in open source products from across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference to present to others a variety of research relevant to the open source community.
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Original: People involved in open source products from across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference to present to others a variety of research which is relevant to the open source community.
Revised: People involved in open source products from across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference to present to others a variety of research which is relevant to the open-source community.
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Original:  A variety of different issue were discussed at the conference .
Revised:  A variety of different issues were discussed at the conference .
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Original:  This included Google Gears , which describes itself as an "open source project that enables more powerful web applications . "  Graphical User Interfaces and various hardware issues were also discussed at the conference.
Revised:  This included Google Gears , which describes itself as an "open source project that enables more powerful web applications " Graphical User Interfaces and various hardware issues were also discussed at the conference.
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Original:  This included Google Gears , which describes itself as an "open source project that enables more powerful web applications . "  Graphical User Interfaces and various hardware issues were also discussed at the conference.
Revised:  This included Google Gears , which describes itself as an "open source project that enables more powerful web applications . " Graphical User Interfaces and various hardware issues were also discussed 
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Original:  Another Google Product that was discussed was Google Code, which allows people to search open source code .
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Original: People involved in open source products from across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference on Sunday to present a variety of research relevant to the open-source community.
Revised: Developers involved in open source products from across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference on Sunday to present a variety of research relevant to the open-source community.
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Original: People involved in open source products from across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference on Sunday to present a variety of research relevant to the open-source community.
Revised: People involved in open source products across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference on Sunday to present a variety of research relevant to the open-source community.
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Original:  Graphical User Interfaces and various hardware issues were also discussed . Galler 
Revised:  Graphical User Interfaces and various hardware issues were also discussed . Gallery 
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Original:  Google ,Yahoo,and Canonical also give talks about Google Gears ,Yahoo UI ,and Ubuntu Mobile.
Revised:  Google ,Yahoo,and Canonical also gave talks about Google Gears ,Yahoo UI ,and Ubuntu Mobile.
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Original: A variety of different issues were discussed at the conference, including , 3DGraphical User Interfaces,web developing tools, new software platforms,and various hardware.
Revised: A variety of different issues were discussed at the conference, including , 3D Graphical User Interfaces,web developing tools, new software platforms,and various hardware.
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Original: Developers involved in open source products across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference during Saturday ~ Sunday to present a variety of research relevant to the open-source community.
Revised: Developers involved in open source products across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference on Saturday and Sunday to present a variety of research relevant to the open-source community.
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Original:  A variety of different issues were discussed at the conference, including , 3D Graphical User Interfaces,web developing tools, new software platforms,and various hardware.
Revised:  A variety of different issues were discussed at the conference, including 3D Graphical User Interfaces,web developing tools, new software platforms,and various hardware.
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Original:  The earthquake struck 770 miles North East of Cayenne, the capital of French Guiana  
Revised:  The earthquake struck 770 miles North East of Cayenne, the capital of French Guiana . 
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Original: The location of the Mid-Atlantic Ridge An eathquake with a magnitude of 5.2 has struck at the coast just north of French Guiana.
Revised: The location of the earthquake An eathquake with a magnitude of 5.2 has struck at the coast just north of French Guiana.
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Original:  The attack, which took place yesterday evening, also resulted in the Taliban taking many of the weapons used by the police  
Revised:  The attack, which took place yesterday evening, also resulted in the Taliban taking many of the weapons used by the police . 
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Original:  "At least 11 Afghan police were killed last night in the Arghandab district," he said when talking to AFP  
Revised:  "At least 11 Afghan police were killed last night in the Arghandab district," he said when talking to AFP . 
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Original:  The Ministry released a statement regarding the deaths, part of which can be seen below
Revised:  The Ministry released a statement regarding the deaths, the beginning of which can be seen below
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Original:  The Ministry released a statement regarding the deaths, the beginning of which can be seen below  
Revised:  The Ministry released a statement regarding the deaths, the beginning of which can be seen below . 
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Original: The UK Ministry of Defence  has said that two British servicemen died in a roadside bombing in Afghanistan.
Revised: The UK Ministry of Defence (MoD) has said that two British servicemen died in a roadside bombing in Afghanistan.
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Original:  It has been reported that they are not currently in a life-threatening condition  
Revised:  It has been reported that they are not currently in a life-threatening condition . 
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Original:  After an 8-5 loss to the Boston Red Sox Sunday night, relief pitcher Joba Chamberlain of the New York Yankees returned a call to his sister back in Lincoln, Nebraska.
Revised: Joba Chamberlain After an 8-5 loss to the Boston Red Sox Sunday night, relief pitcher Joba Chamberlain of the New York Yankees returned a call to his sister back in Lincoln, Nebraska.
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Original: Joba Chamberlain After an 8-5 loss to the Boston Red Sox Sunday night, relief pitcher Joba Chamberlain of the New York Yankees returned a call to his sister back in Lincoln, Nebraska .
Revised: Joba Chamberlain After an 8-5 loss to the Boston Red Sox Sunday night, relief pitcher Joba Chamberlain of the New York Yankees returned a call to his sister after an 8-5 loss to the Boston Red Sox Sunday night. After speaking with his sister who was in Lincoln, Nebraska .
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Original:  When he hung up , he was in tears , consoled by manager Joe Girardi.
Revised:  When he hung up , he was in tears and being consoled by manager Joe Girardi.
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Original:  Although the exact nature of his collapse is unknown, Harlan, a full-blooded Winnebago Native American, has struggled with polio since childhood.
Revised:  Although the exact nature of his collapse is unknown, Harlan, a full-blooded Winnebago Native American, has struggled with post-polio syndrome since childhood.
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Original:  Wheeler is known for a variety of accomplishments, including coining the term "black hole" .
Revised:  Wheeler is known for a variety of accomplishments, including coining the term "black hole" to describe such objects.
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Original:  Wheeler was also known for his work along with Richard Feynman and others in the Manhattan Project  which produced the first nuclear nuclear fission bomb.
Revised:  Wheeler was also known for his work along with Richard Feynman and others in the Manhattan Project , which produced the first nuclear nuclear fission bomb.
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Original:  Wheeler was also later involved in the work to build the first fusion bomb.
Revised:  He was later involved in the work to build the first fusion bomb.
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Original:  Wheeler was known for his skill and accomplishment in teaching as much as he was known for his research  .
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Original:  Wheeler was known for his skill and accomplishment in teaching as much as he was known for his research  .
Revised:  Wheeler was known for his skill and accomplishment in teaching as much as he was known for his research , Wheeler was known for his skill and accomplishment in teaching .
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Original:  He then went on to work in w:Copenhagen with [w:Niels Bohr|Niels Bohr]] and then later returned to the United States to become part of the Manhattan project during World War II.
Revised:  He then went on to work in w:Copenhagen with [w:Niels Bohr|Niels Bohr]] and later returned to the United States to become part of the Manhattan project during World War II.
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Original:  He then went on to work in w:Copenhagen with [w:Niels Bohr|Niels Bohr]] and then later returned to the United States to become part of the Manhattan project during World War II.
Revised:  He then went on to work in w:Copenhagen with [w:Niels Bohr|Niels Bohr]] and then later returned to the United States to become part of the Manhattan Project during World War II.
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Original:  Wheeler continued to do physics after the war and was involved in the United States Matterhorn project to build a hydrogen bomb before the Soviet Union.
Revised:  Wheeler continued to work in physics after the war and was involved in the United States Matterhorn project to build a hydrogen bomb before the Soviet Union.
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Original:  Wheeler's politics were more militaristic than many of his fellow scientists at the time and he supported building the hydrogen bomb and also supported the Vietnam War . Wheeler was for a long time  at Princeton University and he was the doctoral adviser for many prominent physicists including Kip Thorne and Noble prize winner Richard Feynman.
Revised:  His politics were more militaristic than many of his fellow scientists at the time and he supported building the hydrogen bomb and also supported the Vietnam War . Wheeler was for a long time at Princeton University and he was the doctoral adviser for many prominent physicists including Kip Thorne and Noble prize winner Richard Feynman.
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Original:  Wheeler's politics were more militaristic than many of his fellow scientists at the time and he supported building the hydrogen bomb and also supported the Vietnam War . Wheeler was for a long time  at Princeton University and he was the doctoral adviser for many prominent physicists including Kip Thorne and Noble prize winner Richard Feynman.
Revised:  Wheeler's politics were more militaristic than many of his fellow scientists at the time and he supported building the hydrogen bomb . Wheeler was for a long time at Princeton University and he was the doctoral adviser for many prominent physicists including Kip Thorne and Noble prize winner Richard Feynman.
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Original:  Wheeler's politics were more militaristic than many of his fellow scientists at the time and he supported building the hydrogen bomb and also supported the Vietnam War . Wheeler was for a long time  at Princeton University and he was the doctoral adviser for many prominent physicists including Kip Thorne and Noble prize winner Richard Feynman.
Revised:  Wheeler's politics were more militaristic than many of his fellow scientists at the time and he supported building the hydrogen bomb and also supported the Vietnam War . For a long time at Princeton University and he was the doctoral adviser for many prominent physicists including Kip Thorne and Noble prize winner Richard Feynman.
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Original:  Wheeler's politics were more militaristic than many of his fellow scientists at the time and he supported building the hydrogen bomb and also supported the Vietnam War . Wheeler was for a long time  at Princeton University and he was the doctoral adviser for many prominent physicists including Kip Thorne and Noble prize winner Richard Feynman.
Revised:  Wheeler's politics were more militaristic than many of his fellow scientists at the time and he supported building the hydrogen bomb and also supported the Vietnam War . Wheeler was for a long time at Princeton University as the doctoral adviser for many prominent physicists including Kip Thorne and Noble prize winner Richard Feynman.
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Original:  Wheeler went on to  University of Texas at Austin in 1976 when Princeton's mandatory retirement age neared.
Revised:  Wheeler went on to the University of Texas at Austin in 1976 when Princeton's mandatory retirement age neared.
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Original:  Physicists both young and old have paid tribute to Wheeler . Max Tegmark told the New York Times that Wheeler had been "the only physics superhero still standing".
Revised:  Physicists both young and old have paid tribute to Wheeler ; Max Tegmark told the New York Times that Wheeler had been "the only physics superhero still standing".
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Original: Wheeler was also known for his work along with Richard Feynman and others in the Manhattan Project, which produced the first nuclear nuclear fission bomb.
Revised: Wheeler was also known for his work along with Richard Feynman and others in the Manhattan Project, which produced the first nuclear fission bomb.
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Original:  He then went on to work in w: Copenhagen with Niels Bohr and later returned to the United States to become part of the Manhattan Project during World War II.
Revised:  He then went on to work in Copenhagen with Niels Bohr and later returned to the United States to become part of the Manhattan Project during World War II.
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Original:  He is survived by three children  along with grand-children and great-grand children
Revised:  He is survived by three children , along with grand-children and great-grand children
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Original:  Lift-off occurred at 20:12  GMT. It is the first commercial launch of an Atlas rocket since responsibility for the launches was transferred from International Launch Services to United Launch Alliance, through Lockheed Martin.
Revised:  Lift-off occurred at 20:12 :00 GMT. It is the first commercial launch of an Atlas rocket since responsibility for the launches was transferred from International Launch Services to United Launch Alliance, through Lockheed Martin.
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Original:  Lift-off occurred at 20:12:00 GMT . It is the first commercial launch of an Atlas rocket since responsibility for the launches was transferred from International Launch Services to United Launch Alliance, through Lockheed Martin.
Revised:  Lift-off occurred at 20:12:00 UTC . It is the first commercial launch of an Atlas rocket since responsibility for the launches was transferred from International Launch Services to United Launch Alliance, through Lockheed Martin.
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Original:  It is the heaviest satellite to be launched by an Atlas rocket, and the heaviest single  satellite to be launched into a geosynchronous transfer orbit  
Revised:  It is the heaviest satellite to be launched by an Atlas rocket, and the heaviest single satellite to be launched into a geosynchronous transfer orbit . 
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Original:  Commander Scott Henderson, of the 45th Space Group , United States Air Force, said that the launch was "a great success", and the result of "phenominal effort" on the part of those involved.
Revised:  Colonel Scott Henderson, of the 45th Space Group , United States Air Force, said that the launch was "a great success", and the result of "phenominal effort" on the part of those involved.
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Original:  Michael Gass, the CEO of United Launch Alliance said that the successful launch was a "testimony to this entire team", and told flight controllers "congratulations, you're the best"  
Revised:  Michael Gass, the CEO of United Launch Alliance said that the successful launch was a "testimony to this entire team", and told flight controllers "congratulations, you're the best" . 
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Original: 200px|An earlier Atlas V launch A United Launch Alliance Atlas V carrier rocket launched this evening from LC-41 at the Cape Canaveral Air Force Station in Florida, USA, with the ICO G1 communications satellite for ICO Satellite Management.
Revised: 200px|An earlier Atlas V launchA United Launch Alliance Atlas V carrier rocket launched this evening from LC-41 at the Cape Canaveral Air Force Station in Florida, USA, with the ICO G1 communications satellite for ICO Satellite Management.
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Original:  It was constructed by Space Systems/Loral, and is is based on the LS-1300 satellite bus.
Revised:  It was constructed by Space Systems/Loral, and is based on the LS-1300 satellite bus.
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Original:  The aircraft had rapidly disapeared from radar after takeoff due to a believed transponder failure.
Revised:  The aircraft had rapidly disappeared from radar after takeoff due to a believed transponder failure.
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Original:  After air traffic control informed the flight crew a decision was made to return and perform an emergency landing, but the aircraft crashed before this could be acheived at 22:15 local time (20:15 GMT).
Revised:  After air traffic control informed the flight crew a decision was made to return and perform an emergency landing, but the aircraft crashed before this could be achieved at 22:15 local time (20:15 GMT).
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Original:  Seven bodies have been identified  
Revised:  Seven bodies have been identified . 
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Original: Monday April 14, 2008 Counting continues in Nepal for the much awaited elections of the constituent assembly that took place on April 10, 2008.
Revised:  Counting continues in Nepal for the much awaited elections of the constituent assembly that took place on April 10, 2008.
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Original:  Christian Science Monitor said the voters "turned out in full force  " CS Monitor .
Revised:  Christian Science Monitor said the voters "turned out in full force . " CS Monitor .
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Original:  Christian Science Monitor said the voters "turned out in full force  " CS Monitor .
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Original:  According to Kantipur Online All results , results have been declared for at least 204 seats with CPN-Maoists winning 112 of the seats, declared so far.
Revised:  According to Kantipur Online , results have been declared for at least 204 seats with CPN-Maoists winning 112 of the seats, declared so far.
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Original:  Two other major parties Nepali Congress and CPN-United Marxists Leninists are just behind with 33 and 27 seats respectively  
Revised:  Two other major parties Nepali Congress and CPN-United Marxists Leninists are just behind with 33 and 27 seats respectively . 
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Original:  335 members would be elected through a proportionate electoral system, 240 members through election in constituencies (First Past The Post  system) and a further 26 on recommendation by the Council of Ministers  .
Revised:  335 members would be elected through the proportional representation electoral system, 240 members through election in constituencies (First Past The Post system) and a further 26 on recommendation by the Council of Ministers .
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Original:  Jimmy Carter has dignified this position with his presence, and one cannot but wonder how this attitude is supposed to promote peace and understanding.    
Revised:  Jimmy Carter has dignified this position with his presence, and one cannot but wonder how this attitude is supposed to promote peace and understanding. " 
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Original:  They see Carter's mission as undermining to their efforts.
Revised:  They see Carter's mission as counterproductive to their efforts.
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Original: Image:Jimmy Carter.jpg|Jimmy Carter Former President of the United States, Jimmy Carter met with Nasser al-Shaer on Tuesday.
Revised:  Former President of the United States, Jimmy Carter met with Nasser al-Shaer on Tuesday.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Carter asked what he can do to achieve peace between the Palestinians and Israel ... and I told him the possibility for peace is high," Shaer said.
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Original:  Friday, Carter is scheduled to meet in Damascus, Syria with Khaled Mashal, who is considered the political leader of Hamas and is the head of its Syrian branch.
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Original:  Jimmy Carter has dignified this position with his presence, and one cannot but wonder how this attitude is supposed to promote peace and understanding." "Since Syria and Hamas will have to be involved in a final peace agreement, they have to be involved in discussions that lead to final peace," Jimmy Carter told reporters in Ramallah.
Revised:  Jimmy Carter has dignified this position with his presence, and one cannot but wonder how this attitude is supposed to promote peace and understanding." 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Jimmy Carter's view of the forces at work in the Middle East and how he likes to attribute blame and responsibility is so warped to my way of thinking that I'm skeptical of any initiative he undertakes," said Howard Berman.
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Original: Ollie Johnston in 1993 date|April 15, 2008 Ollie Johnston, the last of Disney's so-called "Nine Old Men", has died.
Revised: Ollie Johnston in 1993 Ollie Johnston, the last of Disney's so-called "Nine Old Men", has died.
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Original:  Ollie Johnston, the last of Disney's so-called "Nine Old Men", has died . Johnston died of natural causes on Monday . Johnston, along with partner Frank Thomas (who died in 2004), worked on many of the Disney's classic films, including "Snow White " , "Pinnochio", "Bambi", "Fantasia", and many others.
Revised: American animator Ollie Johnston, the last of Disney's so-called "Nine Old Men", has died . Johnston died of natural causes on Monday . Johnston, along with partner Frank Thomas (who died in 2004), worked on many of the Disney's classic films, including "Snow White " , "Pinnochio", "Bambi", "Fantasia", and many others.
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Original: Ollie Johnston in 1993 American animator Ollie Johnston, the last of Disney's so-called "Nine Old Men", has died at the age of 95. Johnston , along with partner Frank Thomas (who died in 2004), worked on many of the Disney's classic films, including Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs , "Pinnochio ", "Bambi", "Fantasia ", and many others.
Revised: Ollie Johnston in 1993 American animator Ollie Johnston, the last of Disney's so-called "Nine Old Men", has died at the age of 95. Johnston worked on many of the Disney's classic films, including Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs , "Pinnochio ", "Bambi", "Fantasia ", and many others.
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