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Original:  Influence on the independence movement Harry Thuku's ideals and approach went on to inform the larger struggle for political and economic independence that took Africa like wild-fire from the late 1940s to '60s.
Revised:  Influence on the independence movement Harry Thuku's ideals and approach were one strand in the larger African struggle for political and economic independence that took Africa like wild-fire from the late 1940s to '60s.
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Original:  Influence on the independence movement Harry Thuku's ideals and approach went on to inform the larger struggle for political and economic independence that took Africa like wild-fire from the late 1940s to '60s.
Revised:  Influence on the independence movement Harry Thuku's ideals and approach went on to inform the larger struggle for political and economic independence from the late 1940s to '60s.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Notes 1. J. Makong’o et al.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5. See Lonsdale 2004 for white civilian participation, and Thuku 1970: 33 for the claim that white civilians shot protesters in the back.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5. See Lonsdale 2004 for white civilian participation, and Thuku 
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Original:  The White Paper issued by the British Government put the number of dead at 21 (The Times (Saturday, 27 May 1922), p.9.)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7. The Times (Thursday, 8 January 1931), p. 11. 8. Thuku 's apparent premise was false: not all, or even most, of the Kikuyu had taken the Mau Mau oaths.
Revised:  The White Paper issued by the British Government put the number of dead at 21 (The Times (Saturday, 27 May 1922), p.9.)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 8. Thuku 's apparent premise was false: not all, or even most, of the Kikuyu had taken the Mau Mau oaths.
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Original:  The White Paper issued by the British Government put the number of dead at 21 (The Times (Saturday, 27 May 1922), p.9.)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7. The Times (Thursday, 8 January 1931), p. 11. 8. Thuku 's apparent premise was false: not all, or even most, of the Kikuyu had taken the Mau Mau oaths.
Revised:  The White Paper issued by the British Government put the number of dead at 21 (The Times (Saturday, 27 May 1922), p.9.)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7. The Times (Thursday, 8 January 1931), p. 11. 's apparent premise was false: not all, or even most, of the Kikuyu had taken the Mau Mau oaths.
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Original:  It unclear, therefore, how seriously his denunciation would have been taken. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 9. The Times (Saturday, 13 December 1952), p. 6. The Times (Friday, 29 January 1954), p. 8.   
Revised:  It unclear, therefore, how seriously his denunciation would have been taken. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 9. The Times (Saturday, 13 December 1952), p. 6. The Times (Friday, 29 January 1954), p. 8. References
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Original: See Wipper 1989:313 On the morning of the 16th, a crowd of 7-8 ,000 of his supporters gathered around the Nairobi police station to demand his release from detention.
Revised: See Wipper 1989:313 On the morning of the 16th, a crowd of 7,000 to 8 ,000 of his supporters gathered around the Nairobi police station to demand his release from detention.
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Original: Some of Fletcher's contemporaries, notably Philip Massinger and James Shirley, wrote successful and popular tragicomedies.
Revised: Some of Fletcher's contemporaries, notably Philip Massinger and James Shirley, wrote popular tragicomedies.
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Original:  Later developments The more subtle criticism that developed after the Renaissance stressed the thematic and formal aspects of tragicomedy, rather than plot.
Revised:  Later developments Criticism that developed after the Renaissance stressed the thematic and formal aspects of tragicomedy, rather than plot.
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Original:  Even more commonly, tragicomedy 's affinity with satire and "dark" comedy have suggested a tragicomic impulse in modern theatre with Luigi Pirandello who influenced Beckett .
Revised:  Tragicomedy 's affinity with satire and "dark" comedy have suggested a tragicomic impulse in modern theatre with Luigi Pirandello who influenced Beckett .
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Original:  Even more commonly, tragicomedy 's affinity with satire and "dark" comedy have suggested a tragicomic impulse in modern theatre with Luigi Pirandello who influenced Beckett .
Revised:  Even more commonly, tragicomedy 's affinity with satire and "dark" comedy have suggested a tragicomic impulse in modern theatre with Luigi Pirandello who influenced many playwrights including Samuel Beckett and Tom Stoppard .
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Original: Renaissance revivals Italy Plautus's comment had an arguably excessive impact on Renaissance aesthetic theory, which had largely transformed Aristotle's comments on drama into a rigid theory.
Revised: Renaissance revivals ITALY Plautus's comment had an arguably excessive impact on Renaissance aesthetic theory, which had largely transformed Aristotle's comments on drama into a rigid theory.
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Original: Syed Sharifuddin Pirzada () NI (12 June 1923 – 2 June 2017) was a noted Pakistani lawyer , served as a senior advocate at the Supreme Court of Pakistan.
Revised: Syed Sharifuddin Pirzada () NI (12 June 1923 – 2 June 2017) was a noted Pakistani lawyer who served as a senior advocate at the Supreme Court of Pakistan.
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Original:  He was the prime advisor to General Pervez Musharraf against maintaining the status quo regarding the 1973 constitutional oath given to the judges prior to the general's coup d'état.
Revised:  Pirzada was the prime advisor to General Pervez Musharraf against maintaining the status quo regarding the 1973 constitutional oath given to the judges prior to the general's coup d'état.
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Original:  Moved Resolution 2253 of the United Nations General Assembly on the “ status of Jerusalem ” in 1967.
Revised:  Moved Resolution 2253 of the United Nations General Assembly on the " status of Jerusalem ” in 1967.
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Original:  Moved Resolution 2253 of the United Nations General Assembly on the “ status of Jerusalem ” in 1967.
Revised:  Moved Resolution 2253 of the United Nations General Assembly on the “ status of Jerusalem " in 1967.
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Original:  Pakistan ’ s complaint against India in the matter of overflights at the International Civil Aviation Organization (ICAO) 1971.
Revised:  Pakistan ' s complaint against India in the matter of overflights at the International Civil Aviation Organization (ICAO) 1971.
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Original:  Some Aspects of Quaid-i-Azam ’ s Life 1978.
Revised:  Some Aspects of Quaid-i-Azam ' s Life 1978.
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Original:  Musharraf had agreed, later when asked by Mr. Munshi, Siddiqui refused and rejected the notion that judges of the courts be administered any other oath and that to contrary to the ones under the 1973 constitution.
Revised:  Musharraf had agreed, later when asked by Mr. Munshi, Siddiqui refused and rejected the notion that judges of the courts be administered any other oath and contrary to the ones under the 1973 constitution.
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Original:  He was a highly-controversial figure amongst political and judicial circles in Pakistan due to his regular legal work in ensuring the legitimacy of Pakistani military rulers, as well as offering his services to a wide variety of entities seeking on ensuring the status quo in the country.
Revised:  He was a highly-controversial figure amongst political and judicial circles in Pakistan due to his regular legal work in ensuring the legitimacy of Pakistani military rulers, as well as offering his services to a wide variety of entities seeking to ensure the status quo in the country.
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Original:  In addition, he is a member of the Pakistan Civil Service, having served as both Foreign Minister under Ayub Khan and the Attorney-General under Zia-ul-Haq.
Revised:  In addition, he was a member of the Pakistan Civil Service, having served as both Foreign Minister under Ayub Khan and the Attorney-General under Zia-ul-Haq.
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Original: Charu Majumdar (May 15, 1919 – July 28, 1972), was a militant communist from India.
Revised: Charu Majumdar (May 15, 1919 – July 28, 1972), was a communist revolutionary from India.
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Original: Charu Majumdar (May 15, 1919 – July 28, 1972), commonly known Comrade CM, was a communist revolutionary from India.
Revised: Charu Majumdar (May 15, 1919 – July 28, 1972), popularly known as Comrade CM, was a communist revolutionary from India.
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Original:  He also authored the historic accounts of the 1967 Naxalbari uprising and his writings have become the ideology which guides the Naxal movement.
Revised:  During this period, he authored the historic accounts of the 1967 Naxalbari uprising and his writings have become the ideology which guides the Naxal movement.
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Original:  After dropping out of college in 1937–38 , Majumdar joined the then banned Communist Party of India (CPI) to work in its peasant front.
Revised:  After dropping out , Majumdar joined the then banned Communist Party of India (CPI) to work in its peasant front.
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Original:  His ailing father and unmarried sister lived there in abject poverty.
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Original:  This group would later become known as the Naxalites, and eight articles written by him at this time—known as the Historic Eight Documents—have been seen as providing their ideological foundation: arguing that revolution must take the path of armed struggle on the pattern of the Chinese revolution.
Revised:  This group would later be known as the Naxalites, and eight articles written by him at this time—known as the Historic Eight Documents—have been seen as providing their ideological foundation: arguing that revolution must take the path of armed struggle on the pattern of the Chinese revolution.
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Original:  Perhaps most notably, Mark Zuckerberg, founder/creator of Facebook, who bought Oculus for 2 billion USD in 2014.
Revised:  Perhaps most notably, Mark Zuckerberg, founder/creator of Facebook, bought Oculus for 2 billion USD in 2014.
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Original: Engineer research psychologist from the Naval Research Laboratory (NRL) demonstrates the Infantry Immersive Trainer (IIT), one of several Virtual Training Environment projects (VIRTE) A Version of Modern Virtual Reality Goggles that would be used today.
Revised: Engineer research psychologist from the Naval Research Laboratory (NRL) demonstrates the Infantry Immersive Trainer (IIT), one of several Virtual Training Environment projects (VIRTE) upA version of modern virtual reality goggles that would be used today.
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Original:  Elements of Immersive Technology Man uses immersive technology headset and hand controls to complete the stage of a virtual reality videogame.
Revised:  Elements of immersive technology Man uses immersive technology headset and hand controls to complete the stage of a virtual reality videogame.
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Original:  Types of Immersive Technology Virtual reality is the primary source of immersive technology that allows the user to be completely immersed in a fully digital environment that replicates another reality.
Revised:  Types of immersive technology Virtual reality is the primary source of immersive technology that allows the user to be completely immersed in a fully digital environment that replicates another reality.
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Original:  This is when the users interaction on a virtual game lead to them interacting in real life.
Revised:  This is when the user's interaction on a virtual game lead to them interacting in real life.
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Original:  The gaming world has developed a series of popular virtual reality videogames like, Vader Immortal, Trover Saves The Universe, No Man's Sky , and much more .
Revised:  The gaming world has developed a series of popular virtual reality videogames , such asVader Immortal, Trover Saves The Universe, No Man's Sky , and much more .
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Original:  The gaming world has developed a series of popular virtual reality videogames like, Vader Immortal, Trover Saves The Universe, No Man's Sky , and much more .
Revised:  The gaming world has developed a series of popular virtual reality videogames like, Vader Immortal, Trover Saves the Universe, and No Man's Sky , and much more .
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Original:  The gaming world has developed a series of popular virtual reality videogames like, Vader Immortal, Trover Saves The Universe, No Man's Sky , and much more .
Revised:  The gaming world has developed a series of popular virtual reality videogames like, Vader Immortal, Trover Saves The Universe, No Man's Sky .
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Original: Vision 3D display 
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Original: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
Revised: High-resolution audioSurround sound Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
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Original: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
Revised: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
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Original: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
Revised: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
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Original: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
Revised: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction Various technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
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Original: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
Revised: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment , including brain-computer interfaces, gesture recognition, omnidirectional treadmills, and speech recognition. Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
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Original: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software " Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
Revised: High-resolution audioSurround sound Tactile Haptic technology Olfaction Machine olfaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustation Artificial flavor Interaction These technologies provide the ability to interact and communicate with the virtual environment . Brain–computer interface Gesture recognitionOmnidirectional treadmill Speech recognition Software Software interacts with the hardware technology to render the virtual environment and process the user input to provide dynamic,
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Original:  Examples are Stanford's Virtual Human Interaction Lab, USC's Computer Graphics and Immersive Technologies Lab, Iowa State Virtual Reality Applications Center, University of Buffalo's VR Lab, Teesside University's Intelligent Virtual Environments Lab, Liverpool John Moores University's Immersive Storyl lab , University of Michigan Ann Arbor, Oklahoma State University and the University of Southern California.
Revised:  Examples are Stanford's Virtual Human Interaction Lab, USC's Computer Graphics and Immersive Technologies Lab, Iowa State Virtual Reality Applications Center, University of Buffalo's VR Lab, Teesside University's Intelligent Virtual Environments Lab, Liverpool John Moores University's Immersive Story Lab , University of Michigan Ann Arbor, Oklahoma State University and the University of Southern California.
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Original:  For example, Legal systems debate on topics of Virtual crime, and whether it is ethical to permit illegal behavior such as rape in a simulated environment, this is relative to the adult industry, art, entertainment and video games industries.
Revised:  For example, Legal systems debate on topics of virtual crime, and whether it is ethical to permit illegal behavior such as rape in a simulated environment, this is relative to the adult industry, art, entertainment and video games industries.
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Original: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () , yaylak (), yaylaq (), یایلاق (), ailoq, jaylaw (), or jayloo (), yeilâq (Persian), yazlak, yaylak () is a Turkic term, meaning summer highland pasture (from yay, meaning summer, and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix in Turkic languages).
Revised: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () is a Turkic term, meaning summer highland pasture (from yay, meaning summer, and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix in Turkic languages).
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Original: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () is a Turkic term , meaning summer highland pasture  (from yay , meaning summer, and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix in Turkic languages ).
Revised: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture (from yay , meaning summer, and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix in Turkic languages ).
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Original: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () is a Turkic term , meaning summer highland pasture  (from yay , meaning summer, and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix in Turkic languages ).
Revised: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () is a Turkic term , meaning summer highland pasture " (from yay , meaning summer, and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix in Turkic languages ).
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Original: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () is a Turkic term , meaning summer highland pasture  (from yay , meaning summer, and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix in Turkic languages ).
Revised: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () is a Turkic term , meaning summer highland pasture (from yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix in Turkic languages ).
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Original: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () is a Turkic term , meaning summer highland pasture  (from yay , meaning summer, and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix in Turkic languages ).
Revised: File:Soŋköl jayloo.jpg|A modern jayloo at Song Köl in Kyrgyzstan]] Yaylag () is a Turkic term , meaning summer highland pasture (from yay , meaning summer, and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ).
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Original:  The converse term is gishlag (also spelled as kışlak or qhishloq), a winter pasture (from kış, qish or gish , a Turkic word for winter ).
Revised:  The converse term is gishlag (also spelled as kışlak or qhishloq), a winter pasture (from kış, qish or gish "winter" ).
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Original:  Transcriptions of the term include yaylak (), yaylaq (), یایلاق (), ailoq, jaylaw (), or jayloo (), and yeilâq (Persian).
Revised:  Transcriptions of the term include yaylak (), yaylaq (), یایلاق (), ailoq, jaylaw (), or jayloo (), and yeylāq (Persian).
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Original: "Anatoly Khazanov, Nomads and the Outside World, Second Edition, University of Wisconsin Press, 1994, p. 23 In Western anthropology yaylag pastoralism more or less corresponds to the notion of transhumance (Transhumanz)Khazanov, ibid., 23;
Revised: "Anatoly Khazanov, Nomads and the Outside World, Second Edition, University of Wisconsin Press, 1994, p. 23 In Western anthropology yaylak pastoralism more or less corresponds to the notion of transhumance (Transhumanz)Khazanov, ibid., 23;
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