wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Karachi: PAF Press Masroor, 1982 pg 295 No 2 Squadron: 19 July 1956 to 10 April 1957Hussain, Syed Shabbir, History of Pakistan Air Force 1947 - 1982.
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Original:  Karachi: PAF Press Masroor, 1982 pg 322 No 32 F.G.A. Wing: 5 May 1958 to 24 October 1958Hussain, Syed Shabbir, History of Pakistan Air Force 1947 - 1982.
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Original:  Karachi: PAF Press Masroor, 1982 pg 308 No 33 Air Supply Wing: May 1961 to January 1962Hussain, Syed Shabbir, History of Pakistan Air Force 1947 - 1982.
Revised:  Karachi: PAF Press Masroor, 1982 pg 308 No 33 Air Supply Wing: May 1961 to January 1962Hussain, Syed Shabbir, History of Pakistan Air Force 1947 – 1982.
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Original:  IMS was incorporated in Boulder, Colorado , USA in 1980.
Revised:  IMS was incorporated in Boulder, Colorado in 1980.
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Original:  The Mission Statement of both the IMS and its journal, Mountain Research and Development, is " To strive for a better balance between mountain environment, development of resources and the well-being of mountain peoples."
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Original:  The Mission Statement of both the IMS and its journal, Mountain Research and Development, is " To strive for a better balance between mountain environment, development of resources and the well-being of mountain peoples."
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Original:  History The International Mountain Society grew out of multidisciplinary collaborations of participants in the United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization ( UNESCO ) Man and Biosphere (MAB) Programme , especially MAB Project 6 (study of the impact of human activities on mountain ecosystems).
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Original:  History The International Mountain Society grew out of multidisciplinary collaborations of participants in the United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization ( UNESCO ) Man and Biosphere (MAB) Programme , especially MAB Project 6 (study of the impact of human activities on mountain ecosystems).
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Original:  Participants, including John Cool, Frank Davidson, Klaus Lampe, A.D.Moddie, Joseph Stein, B.B. Vohra, and J.D. Ives, concluded that there was a need for an organization linking mountain researchers and institutions and also for a journal focused on mountain research.
Revised:  Participants, including John Cool, Frank Davidson, Klaus Lampe, A.D.Moddie, Joseph Stein, B.B. Vohra, and Jack Ives, concluded that there was a need for an organization linking mountain researchers and institutions and also for a journal focused on mountain research.
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Original:  Participants, including John Cool, Frank Davidson, Klaus Lampe, A.D.Moddie, Joseph Stein, B.B. Vohra, and Jack  Ives, concluded that there was a need for an organization linking mountain researchers and institutions and also for a journal focused on mountain research.
Revised:  Participants, including John Cool, Frank Davidson, Klaus Lampe, A.D.Moddie, Joseph Stein, B.B. Vohra, and Jack D. Ives, concluded that there was a need for an organization linking mountain researchers and institutions and also for a journal focused on mountain research.
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Original: The bombardment of Qui Nhơn in 1861 was an attack by a United States Navy warship upon a Vietnamese held fort protecting Qui Nhơn in Cochinchina .
Revised: The bombardment of Qui Nhơn in 1861 was an attack by a United States Navy warship upon a Vietnamese-held fort protecting Qui Nhơn in Cochinchina .
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Original:  SFHAM model is based on the following principles: Each part of the cardiac muscle (interventricular septum, anterior wall, inferior wall, laterall wall, posterior wall) is the source of independent instantaneous potential.
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Original:  SFHAM model is based on the following principles: Each part of the cardiac muscle (interventricular septum, anterior wall, inferior wall, laterall wall, posterior wall) is the source of independent instantaneous potential.
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Original:  Electric potential comming from a particular part of the myocardium is the result of variation in electric charge density including endocardium, M cells and epicardium.
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Original:  Electrical activity of each part of  myocardium of a healthy individual forms a constant contribution expressed in percentage into the entire activity of the myocardium.
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Original:  The value of instantaneous potential depends on he quality and activity of particular parts of the ventricle walls.
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Original: The Capture of Demerara and Essequibo was a French military expedition sent in January 1782 as part of the Anglo-French War.
Revised: The capture of Demerara and Essequibo was a French military expedition sent in January 1782 as part of the Anglo-French War.
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Original: The Capture of Demerara and Essequibo was a French military expedition sent in January 1782 as part of the Anglo-French War.
Revised: The Capture of Demerara and Essequibo was a French military expedition carried out in January 1782 as part of the Anglo-French War.
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Original:  After having made some seizures in the Caribbean Islands, Rodney sent two sloops to take possession of the colonies of Essequibo and Demerara.
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Original:  The colonies had already ' de facto surrendered to six British privateer ships by the time the two naval vessels arrived.
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Original:  The vast quantity of produce which had accumulated due to a lack of shipping proved to be of great value .
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Original: Cust p.294 When Demerara surrendered to the French, the British naval commander  being at that place  signed the capitulation.
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Original: Cust p.294 When Demerara surrendered to the French, the British naval commander  being at that place  signed the capitulation.
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Original:  (1998) Wars of the Americas: A Chronology of Armed Conflict in the New World, 1492 to the Present '' . (ABC-CLIO)
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Original:  There, 335 French men from the Regiment Armagnac and the 1st Legion Volontaires étranger de la Marine launched an assault on the British garrison and compelled Gov. Robert Kinston and his detachment from the 28th Regiment of Foot to surrender.
Revised:  There, 335 French men from the Régiment d' Armagnac and the 1st Legion Volontaires étranger de la Marine launched an assault on the British garrison and compelled Gov. Robert Kinston and his detachment from the 28th Regiment of Foot to surrender.
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Original:  In 1781 , Admiral Lord Rodney sent two sloops from his fleet at Sint Eustatius to take possession of the Dutch colonies of Essequibo and Demerara.
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Original:  In 1782 , the French successfully took possession of these settlements, compelling British Governor Robert Kinston to surrender.
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Original:  In 1782 , the French successfully took possession of these settlements, compelling British Governor Robert Kinston to surrender.
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Original:  The Peace of Paris , which occurred in 1783 , restored these territories to the Dutch.
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Original:  The Peace of Paris , which occurred in 1783 , restored these territories to the Dutch.
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Original:  In December 1780 , Great Britain declared war on the Dutch Republic, bringing it formally into the 4th Anglo-Dutch War.
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Original:  In early 1781 , a large British fleet , under Admiral Lord Rodney , was sent to the West Indies.
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Original:  In early 1781 , a large British fleet , under Admiral Lord Rodney , was sent to the West Indies.
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Original:  In early 1781 , a large British fleet , under Admiral Lord Rodney , was sent to the West Indies.
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Original:  After making seizures in the Caribbean Islands , Rodney sent two sloops to take possession of the colonies of Essequibo and Demerara .
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Original:  The Peace of Paris , which occurred in 1783 , restored these territories to the Dutch.
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Original:  The Peace of Paris , which occurred in 1783 , restored these territories to the Dutch.
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Original: Cust p.294 When Demerara surrendered to the French, the British naval commander , being at that place , signed the capitulation.
Revised: Cust p.294 When Demerara surrendered to the French, the British naval commander in place signed the capitulation.
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Original:  Disciplines such as Telecommunications, Political Science, Engineering, and Medicine  cross multiple disciplines and  require review from many perspectives to achieve maximum accuracy and to prevent duplication of publication.
Revised:  Disciplines such as Telecommunications, Political Science, Engineering, and Medicine cross multiple disciplines and may require review from many perspectives to achieve maximum accuracy and to prevent duplication of publication.
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Original:  Disciplines such as Telecommunications, Political Science, Engineering, and Medicine  cross multiple disciplines and  require review from many perspectives to achieve maximum accuracy and to prevent duplication of publication.
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Original:  Access to the review process allows greater inputfrom a wider array or potential researchers.
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Original:   Interdisciplinary Peer Review Via Social Networking  Interdisciplinary Peer Review via Social Networking –The nature and ease of social networking sites makes Interdisciplinary Peer Review a reality.
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Original:  Dilemma Validation of information in an  Interdisciplinary Peer Review is truly an ongoing or second Interdisciplinary Peer Review.
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Original:  Interdisiplinary Peer Review is a continual process of review.
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Original:  If publication is instant  , the accuracy becomes open to scrutiny .
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Original:  Yahoo Images, Understanding Science Peer Group Learning Collaboation from Yahoo Images
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Original:  EbscoHost Kline, Thompson Julie.
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Original: Interdisciplinary Peer Review (IPR) is a specific term applied to a peer review process with an additional focus outside of the area of the author's subject of expertise.
Revised: Interdisciplinary Peer Review (IPR) is a peer review process with an additional focus outside of the area of the author's subject of expertise.
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Original:  He was the father of Evaristo Madero Elizondo and grandfather of Francisco I. Madero, leader of the Mexican Revolution.
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Original: José Francisco Madero Gaxiola y San Martín ( d. 1833) was a Mexican surveyor and land commissioner.
Revised: José Francisco Madero Gaxiola y San Martín ( died 1833) was a Mexican surveyor and land commissioner.
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Original:  Trouble began at Anahuac in January 1831 as a dispute between Colonel Juan Davis Bradburn, a Kentuckian who had been in the service of Mexico for many years, and José Francisco Madero, a land commissioner..." He was the father of Evaristo Madero Elizondo and great-grandfather of Francisco I. Madero, leader of the Mexican Revolution  .
Revised:  Trouble began at Anahuac in January 1831 as a dispute between Colonel Juan Davis Bradburn, a Kentuckian who had been in the service of Mexico for many years, and José Francisco Madero, a land commissioner..." He was the father of Evaristo Madero Elizondo and great-grandfather of Francisco I. Madero, leader of the Mexican Revolution and president of Mexico .
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Original: Coverage Mars sunset ( The Jet Propulsion Laboratory , Pasadena, CA, developed and manages the Mars Pathfinder mission for NASA's Office of Space Science) Research areas include studying the nature of the Martian surface, the causes and mitigation of ozone depletion and global warming in Earth's atmosphere, the search for life in and the nature and evolution of the universe.
Revised: Coverage Mars sunset ( Jet Propulsion Laboratory , Pasadena, CA, developed and manages the Mars Pathfinder mission for NASA's Office of Space Science) Research areas include studying the nature of the Martian surface, the causes and mitigation of ozone depletion and global warming in Earth's atmosphere, the search for life in and the nature and evolution of the universe.
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Original: Coverage Mars sunset ( The Jet Propulsion Laboratory , Pasadena, CA, developed and manages the Mars Pathfinder mission for NASA's Office of Space Science) Research areas include studying the nature of the Martian surface, the causes and mitigation of ozone depletion and global warming in Earth's atmosphere, the search for life in and the nature and evolution of the universe.
Revised: Coverage Mars sunset ( The Jet Propulsion Laboratory developed and manages the Mars Pathfinder mission for NASA's Office of Space Science) Research areas include studying the nature of the Martian surface, the causes and mitigation of ozone depletion and global warming in Earth's atmosphere, the search for life in and the nature and evolution of the universe.
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Original:  It uses many hundreds to "tiny fishhooks in each of it 16 fingers" and employs artificial intelligence to work its way around obstacles in its path.
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Original: The Jet Propulsion Laboratory (JPL) Science Division investigates physical and chemical processes on the Earth, in the Solar System, and throughout the universe.
Revised: TheJet Propulsion Laboratory Science Division investigates physical and chemical processes on the Earth, in the Solar System, and throughout the universe.
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Original:  commercialise research allow academics to gain relevant industry experience in order to make their research more relevant to society generate additional income for further research and education through commercial returns generate additional income for further research and education through commercial returnsimprove their market-oriented acting and thinkingLambert, Richard (2003): Lambert Review of Business-University Collaboration.
Revised:  commercialise research allow academics to gain relevant industry experience in order to make their research more relevant to society generate additional income for further research and education through commercial returns improve their market-oriented acting and thinkingLambert, Richard (2003): Lambert Review of Business-University Collaboration.
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Original:  Universities in the Marketplace. motivate and provide incentive to staff and students through more stimulating and relevant work and the provision of alternate career paths generate additional income for further research and education through commercial returns However,
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Original:  However there is a growing understanding research understanding in the area of Science-to-Business marketing.
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Original: Science-to-Business Marketing (S2B Marketing ) entails the marketing of research conducted at research institutions, particularly universities, to industry or other interested parties.
Revised: Science-to-business marketing (S2B Marketing ) entails the marketing of research conducted at research institutions, particularly universities, to industry or other interested parties.
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Original: Science-to-Business Marketing (S2B Marketing ) entails the marketing of research conducted at research institutions, particularly universities, to industry or other interested parties.
Revised: Science-to-Business Marketing (S2B marketing ) entails the marketing of research conducted at research institutions, particularly universities, to industry or other interested parties.
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Original:  Introduction to  Science-to-Business Marketing Science-to-Business (S2B) Marketing aims at the use of marketing principles for the area of science, supporting the successful commercialisation of research competencies, capacities and results from a research institution to its research customers.
Revised:  Introduction to science-to-business marketing Science-to-Business Marketing Science-to-Business (S2B) Marketing aims at the use of marketing principles for the area of science, supporting the successful commercialisation of research competencies, capacities and results from a research institution to its research customers.
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Original:  Introduction to  Science-to-Business Marketing Science-to-Business (S2B) Marketing aims at the use of marketing principles for the area of science, supporting the successful commercialisation of research competencies, capacities and results from a research institution to its research customers.
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Original:  Research Impact – The Need for Science / Industry Interaction Today’ s marketplace is characterised by increased competition, rapid change and a shift towards knowledge-based economies.
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Original:  Research Impact – The Need for Science / Industry Interaction Today’ s marketplace is characterised by increased competition, rapid change and a shift towards knowledge-based economies.
Revised:  Research Impact – the need for science / Industry Interaction Today’ s marketplace is characterised by increased competition, rapid change and a shift towards knowledge-based economies.
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