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Original:  He added that in  67 cases, the dead people were identified by RUT (identification number), but their hasve been no death certificates issued . "That is the tool  that allows us to clarify if the death was produced directly by the earthquake or the tsunami."
Revised:  He added that in 67 cases, the dead people were identified by RUT (identification number), but their hasve been no death certificates issued . "That is the tool " that allows us to clarify if the death was produced directly by the earthquake or the tsunami."
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Original:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 dead because of the earthquake and tsunami that affected the central and south zones of Chile in February 27 and March 11.
Revised:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 dead caused the earthquake and tsunami that affected the central and south zones of Chile in February 27 and March 11.
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Original:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 dead because of the earthquake and tsunami that affected the central and south zones of Chile in February 27 and March 11.
Revised:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 dead because of the earthquake and tsunami that struck the central and south zones of Chile in February 27 and March 11.
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Original:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 dead because of the earthquake and tsunami that affected the central and south zones of Chile in February 27 and March 11.
Revised:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 dead because of the earthquake and tsunami that affected the central and south zones of Chile on February 27 and March 11.
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Original:  The official quantity was reported yesterday by the Interior Undersecretary Rodrigo Ubilla.
Revised:  The official death report was released yesterday by the Interior Undersecretary Rodrigo Ubilla.
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Original:  Ubilla explained that "after a rigorous work in which participated Carabineros, the Investigation Police, the Medical Legal Service, and the Civil Registry, and was later checked by the Interior Undersecretary, we made a unique list of dead people and of denunciations of presumed disgraces ." In spite of this, Ubilla said that there are just 359 identified dead people, with death certificate and with the cause of death.
Revised:  Ubilla explained that "after a rigorous work in which participated Carabineros, the Investigation Police, the Medical Legal Service, and the Civil Registry, and was later checked by the Interior Undersecretary, we made a unique list of dead people and of denunciations of presumed dead ." In spite of this, Ubilla said that there are just 359 identified dead people, with death certificate and with the cause of death.
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Original:  He added that in other 67 cases, the dead people was identified by RUT (identification number), but there are not any death certificates issued, that is the tool "that allows us to clarify if the death was produced directly by the earthquake or the tsunami."
Revised:  He added that in other 67 cases, the dead people was identified by RUT (identification number), but there are no death certificates issued, that is the tool "that allows us to clarify if the death was produced directly by the earthquake or the tsunami."
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Original:  Carabineros reports, at least, 97 denunciations of presumed disgraces , related to the cataclysm
Revised:  Carabineros reports, at least, 97 denunciations of presumed disgraces , related to the earthquake
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Original:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 dead caused  the earthquake and tsunami that struck the central and south zones of Chile on February 27 and March 11.
Revised:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 dead caused by the earthquake and tsunami that struck the central and south zones of Chile on February 27 and March 11.
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Original:  In spite of this, Ubilla said that there are just 359 identified dead people, with death certificate and with the cause of death.
Revised:  In spite of this, Ubilla said that there are just 359 identified dead people, with death certificates and cause of death.
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Original:  He added that in other 67  cases, the dead people was identified by RUT (identification number), but there are no death certificates issued, that is the tool "that allows us to clarify if the death was produced directly by the earthquake or the tsunami."
Revised:  He added that in 67 cases, the dead people was identified by RUT (identification number), but there are no death certificates issued, that is the tool "that allows us to clarify if the death was produced directly by the earthquake or the tsunami."
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He added that in other 67  cases, the dead people was identified by RUT (identification number), but there are no death certificates issued, that is the tool "that allows us to clarify if the death was produced directly by the earthquake or the tsunami."
Revised:  He added that in other 67 cases, the dead people were identified by RUT (identification number), but there are no death certificates issued, that is the tool "that allows us to clarify if the death was produced directly by the earthquake or the tsunami."
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Original:  The official death report was released yesterday by the Interior Undersecretary Rodrigo Ubilla.
Revised:  The official death toll was released yesterday by the Interior Undersecretary Rodrigo Ubilla.
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Original:  Carabineros reports, at least, 97 denunciations of presumed deaths , related to the earthquake
Revised:  Carabineros reports, at least, 97 denunciations of presumed disgraces , related to the earthquake
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Original:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 dead caused by the earthquake and tsunami that struck the central and south zones of Chile on February 27 and  March 11.
Revised:  ]] Chilean Goverment confirmed 452 deaths caused by the earthquake and tsunami that struck the central and south zones of Chile on February 27 and March 11.
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Original:  Carabineros reports, at least, 97 denunciations of presumed disgraces , related to the earthquake
Revised:  Carabineros reports, at least, 97 presumed disgraces denunciations , related to the earthquake
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Original:  Carabineros reports, at least, 97 denunciations of presumed disgraces , related to the earthquake
Revised:  Carabineros reports, at least, 97 denunciations of presumed disgraces , related to the cataclysm
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Original:  Yesterday, Inter announced that they will cancel the tour due to safety concerns.
Revised:  Yesterday, Inter announced that they have canceled the tour due to safety concerns.
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Original:  The sandstorm has turned the rain and snow yellow  
Revised:  The sandstorm has turned the rain and snow yellow . 
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Original: File:Baicheng.jpg|Baicheng, China in 2001, during a sandstorm.
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Original:  The sandstorm, have covered homes, streets, and cars in dust and have left the sky in a murky yellow.
Revised:  The sandstorm, which covered homes, streets, and cars in dust and have left the sky in a murky yellow.
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Original:  The sandstorm, have covered homes, streets, and cars in dust and have left the sky in a murky yellow.
Revised:  The sandstorm, have covered homes, streets, and cars in dust , have left the sky in a murky yellow.
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Original:  The air quality was rated at level 5. Peking's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning a sandstorm, and warned the citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm goes . Peking has got a rare cold weather this year, with temperatures below zero  at night, after the spring season officially began.
Revised:  The air quality was rated at level 5. Peking's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning a sandstorm, and warned the citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm dissipates . Peking has got a rare cold weather this year, with temperatures below zero at night, after the spring season officially began.
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Original:  The air quality was rated at level 5. Peking's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning a sandstorm, and warned the citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm goes . Peking has got a rare cold weather this year, with temperatures below zero  at night, after the spring season officially began.
Revised:  The air quality was rated at level 5. Peking's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning a sandstorm, and warned the citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm goes . Peking has got a rare cold weather this year, with temperatures below zero degrees at night, after the spring season officially began.
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Original:  The sandstorm is affecting more than 50 million people, and forecaster don't see signs abating in the short term.
Revised:  The sandstorm is affecting more than 50 million people, and forecasters do not see signs abating in the short term.
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Original:  270 million people in an area of 1.8 million square kilometers had been affected, and it is expected to last this Monday
Revised:  270 million people in an area of 1.8 million square kilometers had been affected, and it is expected to last until Monday
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Original: A severe sandstorm has struck the north-west of China in the past weeks, but it reached Beijing on Saturday morning, with lots of winds and sand.
Revised: A severe sandstorm has struck the north-west of China in the past weeks, reaching Beijing on Saturday morning, with lots of winds and sand.
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Original: A severe sandstorm has struck the north-west of China in the past weeks, but it reached Beijing on Saturday morning, with lots of winds and sand.
Revised: A severe sandstorm has struck the north-west of China in the past weeks, but it reached Beijing on Saturday morning, with significant amounts of winds and sand.
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Original:  The sandstorm, which covered homes, streets, and cars in dust, have left the sky in a murky yellow.
Revised:  The sandstorm, which covered homes, streets, and cars in dust, has left the sky in a murky yellow.
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Original:  The sandstorm, which covered homes, streets, and cars in dust, have left the sky in a murky yellow.
Revised:  The sandstorm, which covered homes, streets, and cars in dust, have left the sky a murky yellow.
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Original:  The air quality was rated at level 5. Peking 's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning  a sandstorm, and warned the citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm dissipates.
Revised:  The air quality was rated at level 5. Peking 's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning of a sandstorm, and warned the citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm dissipates.
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Original:  The air quality was rated at level 5. Peking 's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning  a sandstorm, and warned the citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm dissipates.
Revised:  The air quality was rated at level 5. Peking 's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning a sandstorm, and advised citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm dissipates.
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Original:  Peking has got a rare cold weather this year, with temperatures  below zero degrees at night, after the spring season officially began.
Revised:  Beijing has received unusually cold weather this year, with temperatures below zero degrees at night, after the spring season officially began.
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Original:  Peking has got a rare cold weather this year, with temperatures  below zero degrees at night, after the spring season officially began.
Revised:  Peking has got a rare cold weather this year, with temperatures dropping to below zero degrees at night, after the spring season officially began.
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Original:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has made the  spring sandstorm become worse in the recent years, reaching countries as South Korea and Japan.
Revised:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has made the annual spring sandstorm become worse in the recent years, reaching countries as South Korea and Japan.
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Original:  The storm also hit Xinjiangand Inner Mongolia, Shanxi, Shaanxi and Hebei.
Revised:  The storm also impacted Xinjiang, Inner Mongolia, Shanxi, Shaanxi and Hebei.
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Original:  270 million people in an area of 1.8 million square kilometers had been affected, and it is expected to last until Monday
Revised:  270 million people in an area of 1.8 million square kilometers have been affected, and it is expected to last until Monday
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Original:  270 million people in an area of 1.8 million square kilometers had been affected, and it is expected to last until Monday
Revised:  270 million people in an area of 1.8 million square kilometers had been affected, and the storm is expected to last until Monday
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Original: A severe sandstorm has struck the north-west of China in the past weeks, reaching Beijing on Saturday morning, with significant amounts of winds and sand.
Revised: A severe sandstorm has struck north-west of China in the past weeks, reaching Beijing on Saturday morning, with significant amounts of winds and sand.
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Original: A severe sandstorm has struck the north-west of China in the past weeks, reaching Beijing on Saturday morning, with significant amounts of winds and sand.
Revised: A severe sandstorm has struck the north-west China in the past weeks, reaching Beijing on Saturday morning, with significant amounts of winds and sand.
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Original: Beijing has received unusually coldweather this year , with temperatures dropping to below zero degrees at night, after the spring season officially began .
Revised: The weather in Beijing has been unseasonably cold , with temperatures dropping to below zero degrees at night, after the spring season officially began .
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Original: Beijing has received unusually coldweather this year , with temperatures dropping to below zero degrees at night, after the spring season officially began .
Revised: Beijing has received unusually coldweather this year , with temperatures dropping below the freezing mark at night .
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Original:  The sandstorm is affecting more than 50 million people, and forecasters do not see signs abating in the short term .
Revised:  The sandstorm is affecting more than 50 million people, and forecasters do not see signs of it abating soon .
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Original:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has made the annual spring sandstorm become worse in the recent years, reaching countries  as South Korea and Japan.
Revised:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has caused the annual spring sandstorm become worse in the recent years, reaching countries as South Korea and Japan.
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Original:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has made the annual spring sandstorm become worse in the recent years, reaching countries  as South Korea and Japan.
Revised:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has made the annual spring sandstorms to intensify in recent years, reaching countries as South Korea and Japan.
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Original:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has made the annual spring sandstorm become worse in the recent years, reaching countries  as South Korea and Japan.
Revised:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has made the annual spring sandstorm become worse in the recent years, reaching countries such as South Korea and Japan.
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Original:  270 million people in an area of 1.8 million square kilometers have been affected, and the storm is expected to last until Monday
Revised:  270 million people spread over 1.8 million square kilometers have been affected, and the storm is expected to last until Monday
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Original: A severe sandstorm has struck north-west China in the past weeks, reaching Beijing on Saturday morning , with significant amounts of winds and sand .
Revised: A severe sandstorm has struck north-west China over the past few weeks, reaching Beijing on Saturday morning , with significant amounts of winds and sand .
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Original: A severe sandstorm has struck north-west China in the past weeks, reaching Beijing on Saturday morning , with significant amounts of winds and sand .
Revised: A severe sandstorm has struck north-west China in the past weeks, reaching Beijing on Saturday morning .
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Original:  The air quality was rated at level five.
Revised:  The air quality was rated as level five.
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Original:  Beijing's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning of a sandstorm, and advised citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm dissipates .
Revised:  Beijing's Weather Bureau issued a warning for the sandstorm, and advised citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm dissipates .
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Original:  Beijing's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning of a sandstorm, and advised citizens to stay in their homes until the sandstorm dissipates .
Revised:  Beijing's Weather Bureau issued an alarm warning of a sandstorm, and advised citizens to stay in their homes until it passes .
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Original:  The weather in Beijing has been unseasonably cold , with temperatures dropping below the freezing mark at night .
Revised:  Beijing has experienced unusually cold weather this year , with temperatures dropping below the freezing mark at night .
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Original:  The weather in Beijing has been unseasonably cold , with temperatures dropping below the freezing mark at night .
Revised:  The weather in Beijing has been unseasonably cold , with temperatures below freezing at night, even after the start of spring .
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Original:  The sandstorm is affecting more than 50 million people, and forecasters do not see signs of it abating soon.
Revised:  The sandstorm is affecting more than 50 million people, and forecasters do not see signs of it stopping soon.
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Original:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has caused the annual spring sandstorms to intensify in recent years, reaching countries such as South Korea and Japan.
Revised:  The desertification of the western China and the Mongolian steppes has caused the annual spring sandstorms to intensify in recent years, reaching countries such as South Korea and Japan.
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Original:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has caused the annual spring sandstorms to intensify in recent years, reaching countries such as South Korea and Japan.
Revised:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has made the annual spring sandstorms to intensify in recent years, reaching countries such as South Korea and Japan.
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Original:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has caused the annual spring sandstorms to intensify in recent years, reaching countries such as South Korea and Japan.
Revised:  The desertification of the west of China and the Mongolian steppes has caused the annual spring sandstorm become worse in the recent years, reaching countries such as South Korea and Japan.
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Original:  The storm also impacted Xinjiang, Inner Mongolia, Shanxi, Shaanxi and Hebei . 270 million people spread over 1.8 million square kilometers have been affected, and the storm is expected to last until Monday
Revised:  The storm also impacted Xinjiang, Inner Mongolia, Shanxi, Shaanxi and Hebei . 270 million people over an area of 1.8 million square kilometers have been affected, and the storm is expected to last until Monday
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Original:  The storm also impacted Xinjiang, Inner Mongolia, Shanxi, Shaanxi and Hebei . 270 million people spread over 1.8 million square kilometers have been affected, and the storm is expected to last until Monday
Revised:  The storm also impacted Xinjiang, Inner Mongolia, Shanxi, Shaanxi and Hebei . 270 million people spread over 1.8 million square kilometers . It is expected the storm will last until Monday
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Original:  The boy, who's name was not released, was charged with harassment as a bias crime . Police say that they are not sure if the incident was planned or improvised, although they say it does not effect the case against the boy.
Revised:  The boy, whose name was not released, was charged with harassment as a bias crime . Police say that they are not sure if the incident was planned or improvised, although they say it does not effect the case against the boy.
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Original:  The boy, who's name was not released, was charged with harassment as a bias crime . Police say that they are not sure if the incident was planned or improvised, although they say it does not effect the case against the boy.
Revised:  The boy, who's name was not released, was charged with harassment as a bias crime . Police say that they are not sure if the incident was planned or improvised, although they say it does not affect the case against the boy.
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Original:  But the New York Times reported that Bedouin leaders were arriving at the local police headquarters, possibly over concerns that many of the suspects picked up in the prior bombing in the region were, by human rights group acoounts , Bedouin.
Revised:  But the New York Times reported that Bedouin leaders were arriving at the local police headquarters, possibly over concerns that many of the suspects picked up in the prior bombing in the region were, by human rights group accounts , Bedouin.
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Original:  Hasan was in control of al-Shabaab's operations in Dhobley, near the border with Kenya    ] 
Revised:  Hasan was in control of al-Shabaab's operations in Dhobley, near the border with Kenya . ] 
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Original:  Hasan was in control of al-Shabaab's operations in Dhobley, near the border with Kenya    ] 
Revised:  Hasan was in control of al-Shabaab's operations in Dhobley, near the border with Kenya a] 
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Original: The incident happened while Hasan was leaving a mosque in the city, when gunmen, whose identities are not known, approached and shot him in the head and chest, killing him.
Revised: The incident happened as Hasan was leaving a mosque in the city, when gunmen, whose identities are not known, approached and shot him in the head and chest, killing him.
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Original:  Hasan was in control of al-Shabaab's operations in Dhobley, near the border of Kenya .
Revised:  Hasan was in control of al-Shabaab's operations in Dhobley, near the Kenyan border .
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Original:  [[File:Eyjafjallajökull.jpeg|200px| File photo of Eyjafjallajökull glacier.
Revised:  [[File:Eyjafjallajökull.jpeg|200px| Eyjafjallajökull glacier.
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Original: There main danger is that this eruption can be trigger for nearby MtKatla.
Revised: There is also a danger is that this eruption can be trigger for nearby MtKatla.
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Original:  Three previous eruptions at Eyjafjallajokull had all triggered eruptions at Mt Katla.
Revised:  In the past, eruptions at Eyjafjallajokull had all triggered eruptions at Mt Katla.
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Original:  Three previous eruptions at Eyjafjallajokull had all triggered eruptions at Mt Katla.
Revised:  Three previous eruptions at Eyjafjallajokull have triggered eruptions at Mt Katla.
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Original:  An eruption at Mt Katla is expected to be a far larger and more serious event than this eruption as lava could melt the ice at the top of the mountain and that would set off massive flooding.
Revised:  An eruption at Mt Katla is expected to be a far larger and more serious event than this eruption as lava could melt the ice at the top of the mountain , causing the potential for massive flooding.
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