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Original:  Second, the Three Corpses keep records or their host's misdeeds, ascend to tian "heaven" bimonthly on the Chinese sexagenary cycle day gengshen 庚申 "57th of the 60", and file reports to the Siming 司命 "Director of Destinies" who assigns punishments to shorten the host's lifespan.
Revised:  Second, the Three Corpses keep records or their host's misdeeds, ascend to tian "heaven" bimonthly on the Chinese sexagenary cycle day gengshen 庚申 "57th of the 60", and file reports to the Siming "Director of Destinies" who assigns punishments to shorten the host's lifespan.
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Original:  The Jinjian yuzi jing 金簡玉字經 "Classic of Jade Characters on Slips of Gold" (tr. Maspero 1981:334) specifies, "Those who, in their food, cut off cereals must not take wine, nor meat, nor plants of the five strong flavors;
Revised:  The Jinjian yuzi jing "Classic of Jade Characters on Slips of Gold" (tr. Maspero 1981:334) specifies, "Those who, in their food, cut off cereals must not take wine, nor meat, nor plants of the five strong flavors;
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Original:  The (4th century CE) Ziyang zhenren neizhuan 紫陽真人內傳 "Inner Biography of the True Person of Purple Yang" (tr. Maspero 1981:332) described them living in the Three Cinnabar Fields.
Revised:  The (4th century CE) Ziyang zhenren neizhuan "Inner Biography of the True Person of Purple Yang" (tr. Maspero 1981:332) described them living in the Three Cinnabar Fields.
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Original:  Qīnggǔ 青古 "Old Blue" dwells in the Muddy Pellet Palace within the Upper Dantian, "It is he who makes men blind, or deaf, or bald, who makes the teeth fall out, who stops up the nose and gives bad breath."
Revised:  Qīnggǔ "Old Blue" dwells in the Muddy Pellet Palace within the Upper Dantian, "It is he who makes men blind, or deaf, or bald, who makes the teeth fall out, who stops up the nose and gives bad breath."
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Original:  Bái gū 白姑 "White Maiden" dwells in the Crimson Palace within the Middle Field, "She causes palpitations of the heart, asthma, and melancholy." Xuè shī 血尸 "Bloody Corpse" dwells in the Lower Dantian, "It is through him that the intestines are painfully twisted, that the bones are dried out, that the skin withers, that the limbs have rheumatisms..." Compare the (9th century) Chu sanshi jiuchong baosheng jing "Scripture on Expelling the Three Corpses and Nine Worms to Protect Life" description.
Revised:  Bái gū "White Maiden" dwells in the Crimson Palace within the Middle Field, "She causes palpitations of the heart, asthma, and melancholy." Xuè shī 血尸 "Bloody Corpse" dwells in the Lower Dantian, "It is through him that the intestines are painfully twisted, that the bones are dried out, that the skin withers, that the limbs have rheumatisms..." Compare the (9th century) Chu sanshi jiuchong baosheng jing "Scripture on Expelling the Three Corpses and Nine Worms to Protect Life" description.
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Original:  Bái gū 白姑 "White Maiden" dwells in the Crimson Palace within the Middle Field, "She causes palpitations of the heart, asthma, and melancholy." Xuè shī 血尸 "Bloody Corpse" dwells in the Lower Dantian, "It is through him that the intestines are painfully twisted, that the bones are dried out, that the skin withers, that the limbs have rheumatisms..." Compare the (9th century) Chu sanshi jiuchong baosheng jing "Scripture on Expelling the Three Corpses and Nine Worms to Protect Life" description.
Revised:  Bái gū 白姑 "White Maiden" dwells in the Crimson Palace within the Middle Field, "She causes palpitations of the heart, asthma, and melancholy." Xuè shī "Bloody Corpse" dwells in the Lower Dantian, "It is through him that the intestines are painfully twisted, that the bones are dried out, that the skin withers, that the limbs have rheumatisms..." Compare the (9th century) Chu sanshi jiuchong baosheng jing "Scripture on Expelling the Three Corpses and Nine Worms to Protect Life" description.
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Original:  The upper corpse, Péng jū 彭琚 , lives in the head.
Revised:  The upper corpse, Péng jū , lives in the head.
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Original:  The middle corpse, Péng zàn 彭瓚 , dwells in the heart and stomach.
Revised:  The middle corpse, Péng zàn , dwells in the heart and stomach.
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Original:  The lower corpse, Péng jiǎo 彭矯 , resides in the stomach and legs.
Revised:  The lower corpse, Péng jiǎo , resides in the stomach and legs.
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Original:  The Japanese folk tradition of Kōshin (namely, the Japanese pronunciation of gengshen 庚申 "57th") combines the Daoist Three Corpses with Shintō and Buddhist beliefs, including the Three Wise Monkeys.
Revised:  The Japanese folk tradition of Kōshin (namely, the Japanese pronunciation of gengshen "57th") combines the Daoist Three Corpses with Shintō and Buddhist beliefs, including the Three Wise Monkeys.
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Original:  People attend Kōshin-Machi 庚申待 "57th Day Waiting" events to stay awake all night and prevent the Sanshi 三尸 "Three Corpses" from leaving the body and reporting misdeeds to heaven.
Revised:  People attend Kōshin-Machi "57th Day Waiting" events to stay awake all night and prevent the Sanshi 三尸 "Three Corpses" from leaving the body and reporting misdeeds to heaven.
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Original:  People attend Kōshin-Machi 庚申待 "57th Day Waiting" events to stay awake all night and prevent the Sanshi 三尸 "Three Corpses" from leaving the body and reporting misdeeds to heaven.
Revised:  People attend Kōshin-Machi 庚申待 "57th Day Waiting" events to stay awake all night and prevent the Sanshi "Three Corpses" from leaving the body and reporting misdeeds to heaven.
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Original:  The Chinese published the oldest book on famine foods: the Jiuhuang Bencao 救荒本草 "Materia Medica for the Relief of Famine".
Revised:  The Chinese published the oldest book on famine foods: the Jiuhuang Bencao "Materia Medica for the Relief of Famine".
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Original:  Zhu Su 朱橚 (1361–1425), the fifth son of the Hongwu Emperor, compiled this treatise describing 414 famine food plants.
Revised:  Zhu Su (1361–1425), the fifth son of the Hongwu Emperor, compiled this treatise describing 414 famine food plants.
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Original:  Cook, Theodore A. (2008), "Sanshi and jiuchong 三尸・九蟲 , three corpses and nine worms," in The Encyclopedia of Taoism, ed. by Fabrizio Pregadio, 844-846.
Revised:  Cook, Theodore A. (2008), "Sanshi and jiuchong , three corpses and nine worms," in The Encyclopedia of Taoism, ed. by Fabrizio Pregadio, 844-846.
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Original:  Despeux, Catherine (2008), "Bigu 辟榖 abstention from cereals," in The Encyclopedia of Taoism, ed. by Fabrizio Pregadio, 233-4.
Revised:  Despeux, Catherine (2008), "Bigu abstention from cereals," in The Encyclopedia of Taoism, ed. by Fabrizio Pregadio, 233-4.
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Original:  Levi, Jean (1982), L'abstinence des céréales chez les taoïstes, Études Chinoises I:3-47. Liang Shih-chiu 梁實秋 and Chang Fang-chieh 張芳杰 , eds. (1971), Far East Chinese-English Dictionary, Far East Book Co.
Revised:  Levi, Jean (1982), L'abstinence des céréales chez les taoïstes, Études Chinoises I:3-47. Liang Shih-chiu and Chang Fang-chieh 張芳杰 , eds. (1971), Far East Chinese-English Dictionary, Far East Book Co.
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Original:  Levi, Jean (1982), L'abstinence des céréales chez les taoïstes, Études Chinoises I:3-47. Liang Shih-chiu 梁實秋 and Chang Fang-chieh 張芳杰 , eds. (1971), Far East Chinese-English Dictionary, Far East Book Co.
Revised:  Levi, Jean (1982), L'abstinence des céréales chez les taoïstes, Études Chinoises I:3-47. Liang Shih-chiu 梁實秋 and Chang Fang-chieh , eds. (1971), Far East Chinese-English Dictionary, Far East Book Co.
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Original:  Famine foods listed in the Chiu huang pen ts'ao 救荒本草 : giving their identity, nutritional values and notes on their preparation.
Revised:  Famine foods listed in the Chiu huang pen ts'ao : giving their identity, nutritional values and notes on their preparation.
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Original:  External links Yoked to Earth: A Treatise on Corpse-Demons and Bigu, Frederick R. Dannaway (2009) Chinese Bigu ( 避谷 ) for Yang Sheng, Martin Eisen (2011) What Bigu Means to Me, Eve Adesso (2000) Conference Report, The First National Conference on the Bigu Manifestation, Health Effects and Scientific Research of Yan Xin Qigong, Pennsylvania State University, June 24–25, 2000.
Revised:  External links Yoked to Earth: A Treatise on Corpse-Demons and Bigu, Frederick R. Dannaway (2009) Chinese Bigu ( ) for Yang Sheng, Martin Eisen (2011) What Bigu Means to Me, Eve Adesso (2000) Conference Report, The First National Conference on the Bigu Manifestation, Health Effects and Scientific Research of Yan Xin Qigong, Pennsylvania State University, June 24–25, 2000.
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Original:  [The people of the south were called Man;
Revised:  [The people ofΣ the south were called Man;
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Original:  [The people ofΣ the south were called Man;
Revised:  [The people of the south were called Man;
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Original:  Incorrectly (grains grow wild) according to Kohn (1993:149), "It is a return to a time in the dawn of humanity when there were as yet no grains;
Revised:  According to Kohn (1993:149), "It is a return to a time in the dawn of humanity when there were as yet no grains;
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Original:  Chinese-English Dictionary Definition of / Giles (1912) "to give up eating the five cereals, with a view to immortality.
Revised:  Chinese-English Dictionary Definition of / Giles "to give up eating the five cereals, with a view to immortality.
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Original:  Also, to refuse food, -- and starve" Mathews (1931) "to abstain from cereals in order to attain to immortality;
Revised:  Also, to refuse food, -- and starve" Mathews "to abstain from cereals in order to attain to immortality;
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Original:  The list of which grains were counted varied, but the various lists generally include the leguminous soybean, according to Lihui Yang (2005:70 and 191-192) .
Revised:  The list of which grains were counted varied, but the various lists generally include the leguminous soybean, according to Lihui Yang .
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Original:  (19 , tr. Major et al. 2010:766-767) Houji "Lord Millet" is the god or goddess of agriculture and ancestor of the Zhou people.
Revised:  (19 )Tr. . Houji "Lord Millet" is the god or goddess of agriculture and ancestor of the Zhou people.
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Original:  The Shijing poem Shengmin "Birth of the [Zhou] People" praises Houji for inventing both agriculture and sacrifices (Campany 2005:10-13) .
Revised:  The Shijing poem Shengmin "Birth of the [Zhou] People" praises Houji for inventing both agriculture and sacrifices .
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Original:  While traditional Chinese mythology depicted cooking and agriculture as key elements of civilization, the Daoists created a "counter-narrative" (Campany 2005:16) to justify the idea of grain avoidance.
Revised:  While traditional Chinese mythology depicted cooking and agriculture as key elements of civilization, the Daoists created a "counter-narrative" to justify the idea of grain avoidance.
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Original:  Campany (2005:16) calls this "the decline of Power and the ever-farther departure from the natural Dao into systems of social constraint and what passes for culture."
Revised:  Campany calls this "the decline of Power and the ever-farther departure from the natural Dao into systems of social constraint and what passes for culture."
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Original:  (Schipper 1993:168) When natural or human catastrophes occurred, the peasants could take refuge in non-arable regions of mountains and survive on wild foods other than grains.
Revised:  When natural or human catastrophes occurred, the peasants could take refuge in non-arable regions of mountains and survive on wild foods other than grains.
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Original:  The Shiji (Campany 2005:21) says establishing a new dynasty required eliminating the sheji altars of the preceding dynasty and erecting one's own.
Revised:  The Shiji says establishing a new dynasty required eliminating the sheji altars of the preceding dynasty and erecting one's own.
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Original:  (2005:24) The Chinese character for jing "spirit;
Revised:  The Chinese character for jing "spirit;
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Original:  The (139 BCE) Huainanzi chapter on topography (4 , tr. Major et al. 2010:161) correlates diet and lifespan.
Revised:  The (139 BCE) Huainanzi chapter on topography (4 )Tr. . correlates diet and lifespan.
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Original:  (tr. Roth 2004 1:01) Campany (2005:18) knows of "no text that exalts grains more highly or insists on their importance more strongly than the Guanzi."
Revised:  Campany knows of "no text that exalts grains more highly or insists on their importance more strongly than the Guanzi."
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Original:  Forke 1907:344), to exemplify confusing Daoist xian immortality techniques with natural longevity (see Yü 1965:111) .
Revised:  Forke 1907:344), to exemplify confusing Daoist xian immortality techniques with natural longevity .
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Original:  (tr. Forke 1907:344) This context also mentions Wang Ziquiao , a son of King Ling of Zhou (r. 571-545 BCE).
Revised:  Tr. . This context also mentions Wang Ziquiao , a son of King Ling of Zhou (r. 571-545 BCE).
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Original:  (tr. Campany 2005:37) Ge Hong's (c. 320 CE) Baopuzi contains classical discussions of bigu techniques.
Revised:  Tr. . Ge Hong's (c. 320 CE) Baopuzi contains classical discussions of bigu techniques.
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Original:  (15 , tr. Ware 1966:244 ) Ge Hong chronicles the effects of grain avoidance.
Revised:  (15 ) Ge Hong chronicles the effects of grain avoidance.
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Original:  (15 , tr. Ware 1966:246-7 ) This "holy water" refers to a Daoist fu "talisman" dissolved in water.
Revised:  (15 ) This "holy water" refers to a Daoist fu "talisman" dissolved in water.
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Original:  (15 , tr. Ware 1966:248-9 ) In the Baopuzi, Ge Hong criticizes contemporary charlatans who claimed to have duangu "cut off grains".
Revised:  (15 ) In the Baopuzi, Ge Hong criticizes contemporary charlatans who claimed to have duangu "cut off grains".
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Original:  For examples (2005:2) , "We eat X because X makes us live long" is an internalist rationale based upon essential properties or benefits;
Revised:  For examples , "We eat X because X makes us live long" is an internalist rationale based upon essential properties or benefits;
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Original:  According to Kohn (1993:149) , "It is a return to a time in the dawn of humanity when there were as yet no grains;
Revised:  According to Kohn , "It is a return to a time in the dawn of humanity when there were as yet no grains;
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Original:  (Schipper 1993:170) Grain abstention was prerequisite for the Daoist practice of yangxing "nourishing the inner nature".
Revised:  Grain abstention was prerequisite for the Daoist practice of yangxing "nourishing the inner nature".
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Original:  (1981:255) Some versions of "grain avoidance" could result in health problems, as discussed by Maspero.
Revised:  Some versions of "grain avoidance" could result in health problems, as discussed by Maspero.
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Original:  (1981:335) Chinese Buddhism adopted Daoist grain abstention as a preparation for self-immolation.
Revised:  Chinese Buddhism adopted Daoist grain abstention as a preparation for self-immolation.
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Original:  Livia Kohn (1993:148) describes the Three Corpses as "demonic supernatural creatures who feed on decay and are eager for the body to die altogether so they can devour it.
Revised:  Livia Kohn describes the Three Corpses as "demonic supernatural creatures who feed on decay and are eager for the body to die altogether so they can devour it.
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Original:  Despeux (2008:234) said, "Abstention from cereals should also be situated in the historical context of social unrest and famine."
Revised:  Despeux said, "Abstention from cereals should also be situated in the historical context of social unrest and famine."
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Original:  (15 , tr. Ware 1966:244 ) Schipper uses medical terminology to explain grain avoidance.
Revised:  (15 ) Schipper uses medical terminology to explain grain avoidance.
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Original:  (Schipper 1993:167) Some contemporary researchers (such as Yan et al. 2002) are clinically investigating bigu fasting.
Revised:  Some contemporary researchers (such as Yan et al. 2002) are clinically investigating bigu fasting.
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Original:  (Schipper 1993:167) Some contemporary researchers (such as Yan et al. 2002) are clinically investigating bigu fasting.
Revised:  (Schipper 1993:167) Some contemporary researchers are clinically investigating bigu fasting.
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Original: File:Obama Portrait 2006.jpg|De Rantau and Damien Dematra co-directed Obama Anak Menteng (Obama, Child of Menteng), which depicted US President Barack Obama's childhood.
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Original:  The Scot, John MacGregor, came back from his North American trip full of excitement about the kayak/canoe and in 1860 started building six boats that closely resembled Eskimo canoes/kayaks, weighing app. . In 1866 he published the book A Thousand Miles in the Rob Roy Canoe.
Revised:  The Scot, John MacGregor, came back from his North American trip full of excitement about the kayak/canoe and in 1860 started building six boats that closely resembled Eskimo canoes/kayaks, weighing approximately . In 1866 he published the book A Thousand Miles in the Rob Roy Canoe.
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Original:  Rock boots result in sounds both at the top of the drop (boat impacting rock) and the bottom (boat bellyflopping into the water).
Revised:  Rock boofs result in sounds both at the top of the drop (boat impacting rock) and the bottom (boat bellyflopping into the water).
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Original:  The Government of India honoured him in 2021, with the award of Padma Shri, the fourth highest Indian civilian award for his rich contribution to art , . Mashangva was featured in the first season of The Dewarists along with The Raghu Dixit Project.
Revised:  The Government of India honoured him in 2021, with the award of Padma Shri, the fourth highest Indian civilian award for his rich contribution to art . Mashangva was featured in the first season of The Dewarists along with The Raghu Dixit Project.
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Original:  Influenced by musicians like Bob Dylan and Bob Marley, Rewben Mashangva has created many Naga tribal folk songs based on blues and ballad rhythms.
Revised:  Influenced by musicians such as Bob Dylan and Bob Marley, Rewben Mashangva has created many Naga tribal folk songs based on blues and ballad rhythms.
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Original:  He is known by different names like, Bob Dylan of the Nagas and King of Naga folk blues , Father of Naga folk blues  .
Revised:  He is known by different names including, ' Bob Dylan of the Nagas and King of Naga folk blues , Father of Naga folk blues .
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Original:  He is known by different names like, Bob Dylan of the Nagas and King of Naga folk blues , Father of Naga folk blues  .
Revised:  He is known by different names like, Bob Dylan of the Nagas ' and ' King of Naga folk blues , Father of Naga folk blues .
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Original:  He is known by different names like, Bob Dylan of the Nagas and King of Naga folk blues , Father of Naga folk blues  .
Revised:  He is known by different names like, Bob Dylan of the Nagas and King of Naga folk blues ', plus ' Father of Naga folk blues .
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Original:  He is known by different names like, Bob Dylan of the Nagas and King of Naga folk blues , Father of Naga folk blues  .
Revised:  He is known by different names like, Bob Dylan of the Nagas and King of Naga folk blues , Father of Naga folk blues ' .
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Original:  Mashangva was featured in the first season of The Dewarists  along with The Raghu Dixit Project.
Revised:  Mashangva was featured in the first season of The Dewarists , along with The Raghu Dixit Project.
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Original:  He is the brother of Jacobie Adriaanse.
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Original:  The catalogue is searchable online in the Access to Archives catalogues
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Original: Golden Lions players Category:Lions (Super Rugby) players Category:  White South African people Category:South African expatriate rugby union players Category:South African expatriate sportspeople in Italy Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Italy Category:Zebre Rugby players Category:Toyota Industries Shuttles players Category:South African expatriate sportspeople in Japan Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Japan Category:Tshwane University of Technology alum
Revised: Golden Lions players Category:Lions (Super Rugby) players Category: Edinburgh Rugby players Category: White South African people Category:South African expatriate rugby union players Category:South African expatriate sportspeople in Italy Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Italy Category:Zebre Rugby players Category:Toyota Industries Shuttles players Category:South African expatriate sportspeople in Japan Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Japan Category:Tshwane University of Technology alum
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Original: South African expatriate sportspeople in Italy Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Italy Category:Zebre Parma players Category:Toyota Industries Shuttles Aichi players Category:South African expatriate sportspeople in Japan Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Japan Category:Tshwane University of Technology alumni Category:US Carcassonne players Category:Blue Bulls players Category:RC Toulonnais players Category:Hurricanes (rugby union)  playe
Revised: South African expatriate sportspeople in Italy Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Italy Category:Zebre Parma players Category:Toyota Industries Shuttles Aichi players Category:South African expatriate sportspeople in Japan Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Japan Category:Tshwane University of Technology alumni Category:US Carcassonne players Category:Blue Bulls players Category:RC Toulonnais players Category:Hurricanes (rugby union) players Category:Bulls (rugby union) playe
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Original:  The Telegraph: "Senegal musician Youssou Ndour appointed culture minister",  5 Apr 2012  He is also president of the Senegalese Green Party, (FEDES).
Revised:  "Senegal musician Youssou Ndour appointed culture minister", 5 Apr 2012 He is also president of the Senegalese Green Party, (FEDES).
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Original:  Haidar El Ali, leader of the Senegalese Green Party, FEDES, is the country's environment minister  Category:Ecologists Category:Government ministers of Senegal Category: Living people Category: 1953 birt
Revised:  Haidar El Ali, leader of the Senegalese Green Party, FEDES, is the country's environment minister Category:Ecologists Category:Government ministers of Senegal Category: Living people Category: 1953 births Category:Living peop
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Original:  Haidar El Ali, leader of the Senegalese Green Party, FEDES, is the country's environment minister, 5 April 2012
Revised:  Haidar El Ali, leader of the Senegalese Green Party, FEDES, is the country's destruction minister, 5 April 2012
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