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Original:  According to newspaper reports, the appreciative crowd included corporate leaders , former world heavyweight champion Joe Frazier, bikie gangs, peroxide blondes and rugby league players.
Revised:  According to newspaper reports, the appreciative crowd included corporate CEOs , former world heavyweight champion Joe Frazier, bikie gangs, peroxide blondes and rugby league players.
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Original:  " Mundine did end up on the canvas in the seventh round, but it was after being pushed through the ropes by Green and "The Man" responded with a trademark smile.
Revised:  Mundine did end up on the canvas in the seventh round, but it was after being pushed through the ropes by Green and "The Man" responded with a trademark smile.
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Original:  " Mundine did end up on the canvas in the seventh round, but it was after being pushed through the ropes by Green and "The Man" responded with a trademark smile.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% With celebrities such as former heavyweight champion Joe Frazier, under-fire Waratah Wendell Sailor, Lachlan Murdoch and Eddie McGuire watching on, Mundine proved his mettle in a fight which was anticipated since a slanging match began between the two six years ago
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Original:  Mundine asked the crowd after the much anticipated fight.
Revised:  Mundine asked the crowd after the fight.
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Original:  Sports media commentators report that the pace remained hectic in the first four rounds , with Mundine standing firm and using his jab as Green mixed his  power punches.
Revised:  Sports media commentators reported that the pace remained hectic in the first four rounds , with Mundine standing firm and using his jab as Green mixed his power punches.
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Original:  Sports media commentators report that the pace remained hectic in the first four rounds , with Mundine standing firm and using his jab as Green mixed his  power punches.
Revised:  Sports media commentators report that the pace remained hectic in the first four rounds as Mundine stood firm and using his jab as Green mixed his power punches.
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Original:  Sports media commentators report that the pace remained hectic in the first four rounds , with Mundine standing firm and using his jab as Green mixed his  power punches.
Revised:  Sports media commentators report that the pace remained hectic in the first four rounds , with Mundine standing firm and using his jab as Green mixed his trademark " power punches.
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Original:   As the fight wore on, Mundine appeared in greater control and in better condition.
Revised:  " As the fight wore on, Mundine appeared in greater control and in better condition.
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Original:  Although Mundine did end up on the canvas in the seventh round, after being pushed through the ropes by Green.
Revised:  However, Mundine did end up on the canvas in the seventh round, after being pushed through the ropes by Green.
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Original:   Green's power punches "missed, missed and missed again".
Revised:  Throughout the fight, Green's power punches "missed, missed and missed again".
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Original:  In the final of a "ferocious" dozen rounds , Mundine rocked Green with a combination to the head, taunting Green to "Come on." Green attempted plenty of combinations, but Mundine's speed caused him problems.
Revised:  In the final "ferocious" dozen rounds , Mundine rocked Green with a combination to the head, taunting Green to "Come on." Green attempted plenty of combinations, but Mundine's speed caused him problems.
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Original:  In the final of a "ferocious" dozen rounds , Mundine rocked Green with a combination to the head, taunting Green to "Come on." Green attempted plenty of combinations, but Mundine's speed caused him problems.
Revised:  In the final of a "ferocious" round , Mundine rocked Green with a combination to the head, taunting Green to "Come on." Green attempted plenty of combinations, but Mundine's speed caused him problems.
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Original:  In the final of a "ferocious" dozen rounds , Mundine rocked Green with a combination to the head, taunting Green to "Come on." Green attempted plenty of combinations, but Mundine's speed caused him problems.
Revised:  In the final of a "ferocious" dozen rounds , Mundine rocked Green with a combination to the head, taunting Green to "Come on." Green attempted plenty of combinations, but Mundine's speed caused problems.
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Original:  The fight is being hailed as the "richest fight ever staged in Australia".
Revised:  The fight was hailed as the "richest fight ever staged in Australia".
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Original:  Betting ensued with one person laying a $500,000 bet on Mundine to take the honours.
Revised:  Heavy betting ensued with one person laying a $500,000 bet on Mundine to take the honours.
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Original:  His victory sets up a world title bout against Dane Mikkel Kessler.
Revised:  His victory sets up a world title bout against Denmark's Mikkel Kessler.
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Original:   The fight was hailed as the " richest fight ever staged in Australia " . Each boxer is reported to be earning a seven-figure sum, while spectators have shelled out between AUD$40 and AUD$1000 for a seat at the bout.
Revised:  Referee Terry O'Connor described the event as a fight Australia can be proud of. "They both gave their all, it was a great fight." He described the atmosphere at Aussie Stadium as "fantastic" "It was the greatest fight I have refereed, it was brilliant," O'Connor said. The fight was hailed as the " richest fight ever staged in Australia " . Each boxer is reported to be earning a seven-figure sum, while spectators have shelled out between AUD$40 and AUD$1000 for a seat at the bout.
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Original:   "It was a close fight last time (against Kessler) .
Revised:  "It was a close fight last time .
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Original: Man beats Machine Former world champion boxer Anthony Mundine has beaten long-time rival Danny Green on a unanimous points decision in a non-title World Boxing Association (WBA) super middleweight bout.
Revised:  Former world champion boxer Anthony Mundine has beaten long-time rival Danny Green on a unanimous points decision in a non-title World Boxing Association (WBA) super middleweight bout.
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Original:  Verizon bought MCI, a long distance company in January and also says that they did not hand over records .
Revised:  Verizon bought MCI, a long distance company in January but says that they did not hand over records .
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Original:  Verizon bought MCI, a long distance company in January but says that they are unsure if they handed over records before the purchase .
Revised:  Verizon bought MCI, a long distance company in January but would not comment on whether or not they handed over records before the purchase .
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Original:  Verizon bought MCI, a long distance company in January but says that they are unsure if they handed over records before the purchase .
Revised:  Verizon bought MCI, a long distance company in January but says that they are unsure if they handed over records .
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Original: Today  New Zealand Finance Minister Hon.
Revised: Today the New Zealand Finance Minister Hon.
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Original:  Key issues in the budget includes: The Telecom New Zealand local loop unbundling. $1.3 billion extra for transport. $3 billion extra for health care, over the next four years. $361   million extra for schooling $166 million extra for tertiary education and skill training $ 162 million extra for early childhood educatio
Revised:  Key issues in the budget includes: The Telecom New Zealand local loop unbundling. $1.3 billion extra for transport. $3 billion extra for health care, over the next four years. $361 Key issues in the budget includes: The Telecom New Zealand local loop unbundling. $1.3 billion extra for transport. $3 billion extra for health care, over the next four years. $361 million extra for schooling $166 million extra for schooling $166 million extra for tertiary education and skill training $ 162 million extra for early childhood educatio
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Original:  Key issues in the budget includes: The Telecom New Zealand local loop unbundling. $1.3 billion extra for transport. $3 billion extra for health care, over the next four years. $361   million extra for schooling $166 million extra for tertiary education and skill training $ 162 million extra for early childhood educatio
Revised:  Key issues in the budget includes: The Telecom New Zealand local loop unbundling. $1.3 billion extra for transport. $3 billion extra for health care, over the next four years. $361 million extra for tertiary education and skill training 162 million extra for early childhood educatio
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Original:  Many of the positions are part time and are held by students from the University of Louisville and Jefferson Community College, with whom UPS has a tuition reinversment dealwith
Revised:  Many of the positions are part time and are held by students from the University of Louisville and Jefferson Community College, with whom UPS has a tuition reimbursement deal
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Original:  UPS has announced a $1 billion dollar expansion at its Louisville, Kentucky air hub to meet their projected future demands.
Revised: The the world's largest package delivery company, UPS has announced a $1 billion dollar expansion at its Louisville, Kentucky air hub to meet their projected future demands.
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Original: The the world's largest package delivery company, UPS has announced a $1 billion dollar expansion at its Louisville, Kentucky air hub to meet their projected future demands.
Revised: The world's largest package delivery company, UPS has announced a $1 billion dollar expansion at its Louisville, Kentucky air hub to meet their projected future demands.
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Original: In one of Manson ’s worst killings, he told a group of his followers to break into the home and his wife Sharon Tate were renting in a town near .
Revised: Manson was found guilty of telling a group of his followers to break into the home and his wife Sharon Tate were renting in a town near .
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Original: Leader of the cult , who has tried to get parole 11 times, had another opportunity to seek it again Wednesday, for his life sentence for his 1969 slayings of actress and six others.
Revised: Leader of the cult , who has tried to get parole 11 times, will have another opportunity to seek it again Wednesday, for his life sentence for his 1969 slayings of actress and six others.
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Original:  Charles Manson parole denied Wednesday.
Revised:  Charles Manson will seek parole Wednesday.
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Original: Manson didn’t go to his last parole hearing in 2007, saying that he was a “ prisoner of the political system.
Revised: Manson didn’t go to his last parole hearing in 2007, saying that he was a " prisoner of the political system.
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Original:  ” He isn’t expected to attend the Wednesday hearing either, according to a spokesperson at .
Revised:  " He isn’t expected to attend the Wednesday hearing either, according to a spokesperson at .
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Original:  Many market analysts and technicians, including Ken Tower from Charles Schwab CyberTrader, felt that the market was overbought and was due for a short-term correction.
Revised:  Many market analysts and technicians, including Ken Tower from Schwab's CyberTrader, felt that the market was overbought and was due for a short-term correction.
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Original:  Most recently, in May 2004, official Frank Sheeran for the Philadelphis Teamsters said in a biography that he was the one to kill Hoffa by shooting and killing Hoffa in a Detroit home.
Revised:  Most recently, in May 2004, official Frank Sheeran for the Philadelphia Teamsters said in a biography that he was the one to kill Hoffa by shooting and killing Hoffa in a Detroit home.
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Original: Previous searchs and claim have turned up nothing.
Revised: Previous searches and claim have turned up nothing.
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Original:  His body was also previously suspected of being buried in Giant's Stadium in the ednzone in Meadowlands, New Jersey, a trash facility linked to the mob in Hamtramck and a landfill also in New Jersey.
Revised:  His body was also previously suspected of being buried in Giant's Stadium in the endzone in Meadowlands, New Jersey, a trash facility linked to the mob in Hamtramck and a landfill also in New Jersey.
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Original:  The FBI received a tip a few weeks ago from an FBI source which authorities believe is credible and detailed enough to warrent a search of the property.
Revised:  The FBI received a tip a few weeks ago from an FBI source which authorities believe is credible and detailed enough to warrant a search of the property.
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Original:  However the Prime minister is not required to seek approval of the house of Commons to deploy forces . Prior to the parliamentary debate, the Conservative government did consult the three opposition parties.
Revised:  However the Prime minister is not required to seek approval of the house of Commons to deploy forces Prior to the parliamentary debate, the Conservative government did consult the three opposition parties.
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Original: On May 17, 2006, Canadian Prime Minister Steven Harper asked the House of Commons (lower house of the Parliament of Canada) for an approval to extend the current mission in Afganistan for two extra years.
Revised:  Canadian Prime Minister Steven Harper asked the House of Commons (lower house of the Parliament of Canada) for an approval to extend the current mission in Afganistan for two extra years.
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Original: On May 17, 2006, Canadian Prime Minister Steven Harper asked the House of Commons (lower house of the Parliament of Canada) for an approval to extend the current mission in Afganistan for two extra years.
Revised: On May 17, 2006, Canadian Prime Minister Steven Harper asked for and received the appoval of the House of Commons (lower house of the Parliament of Canada) for an approval to extend the current mission in Afganistan for two extra years.
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Original: On May 17, 2006, Canadian Prime Minister Steven Harper asked the House of Commons (lower house of the Parliament of Canada) for an approval to extend the current mission in Afganistan for two extra years.
Revised: On May 17, 2006, Canadian Prime Minister Steven Harper asked the House of Commons (lower house of the Parliament of Canada) for a two year extension of the current mission in Afganistan for two extra years.
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Original:  However the  Prime minister is not required to seek approval of the house of Commons to deploy forces  Prior to the parliamentary debate, the Conservative government did consult the three opposition parties.
Revised:  However the The Prime minister is not required to seek approval of the house of Commons to deploy forces Prior to the parliamentary debate, the Conservative government did consult the three opposition parties.
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Original:  However the  Prime minister is not required to seek approval of the house of Commons to deploy forces  Prior to the parliamentary debate, the Conservative government did consult the three opposition parties.
Revised:  However the Prime minister is not required to seek approval of the house of Commons to deploy forces Prior to the parliamentary debate, the Conservative government consulted the three opposition parties.
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Original:  The Bloc Quebecois party and the New Democratic Party voted against the above motionput to the House of Commons . Some members of the Official Opposition or the Liberal Party voted for the above-mentioned extension.
Revised:  The Bloc Quebecois and the New Democratic Party voted against the above motionput to the House of Commons . Some members of the Official Opposition or the Liberal Party voted for the above-mentioned extension.
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Original:  The Bloc Quebecois party and the New Democratic Party voted against the above motionput to the House of Commons . Some members of the Official Opposition or the Liberal Party voted for the above-mentioned extension.
Revised:  The Bloc Quebecois party and the New Democratic Party voted against the motion . Some members of the Official Opposition or the Liberal Party voted for the above-mentioned extension.
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Original:  The Bloc Quebecois party and the New Democratic Party voted against the above motionput to the House of Commons . Some members of the Official Opposition or the Liberal Party voted for the above-mentioned extension.
Revised:  The Bloc Quebecois party and the New Democratic Party voted against the above motionput to the House of Commons . Some members of the Official Opposition , voted for the above-mentioned extension.
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Original:  Tragically though , Captain Nicola Goddard, a Canadian female soldier posted in Afganistan was killed by Taliban rebels on the day of this debate.
Revised:  Tragically , Captain Nicola Goddard, a Canadian female soldier posted in Afganistan was killed by Taliban rebels on the day of this debate.
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Original:  Tragically though , Captain Nicola Goddard, a Canadian female soldier posted in Afganistan was killed by Taliban rebels on the day of this debate.
Revised:  Tragically though , Captain Nicola Goddard, a Canadian female soldier posted in Afganistan was killed by Taliban rebels on the day of the debate.
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Original:  The Prime Minister of Australia will arrive today, (18/05/2006), for a state visit to address the Parliament of Canada and attend various functions .
Revised:  The Prime Minister of Australia will arrive today, (18/05/2006), for a state visit to address the Parliament of Canada and attend various functions 
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Original:  To help co-ordinate NATO plans and our troop deployment, the extension of the above-mentioned military action was necessary
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Original:  The Prime Minister of Australia will arrive today, (18/05/2006), for a state visit to address the Parliament of Canada and attend various functions  
Revised:  The Prime Minister of Australia will arrive today, (18/05/2006), for a state visit to address the Parliament of Canada and attend various functions . 
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Original:  The former PE teacher from Hertfordshire is just 55 miles from becoming the first woman to sail around the world solo against the prevailing winds and currents . =
Revised:  The former PE teacher from Hertfordshire is just 55 miles from becoming the first woman to sail around the world solo against the prevailing winds and currents =
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Original:  The former PE teacher from Hertfordshire is just 55 miles from becoming the first woman to sail around the world solo against the prevailing winds and currents . =
Revised:  The former PE teacher from Hertfordshire is just 55 miles from becoming the first woman to sail around the world solo against the prevailing winds and currents . 
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Original: The Bombay Stock Exhange Senstitive Index (Sensex) crashed 826 points and the National Stock Exchange's index (Nifty) 246 in what was the largest ever intra-day drop in the their histories.
Revised: The Bombay Stock Exchange Senstitive Index (Sensex) crashed 826 points and the National Stock Exchange's index (Nifty) 246 in what was the largest ever intra-day drop in the their histories.
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Original:  At the end of day's trade, the Sensex closed at 11,391 and the Nifty at 3388.
Revised:  At the end of day's trade, the Sensex closed at 11,391 and the Nifty at 3,388.
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Original: Bombay Stock Exchange Analysts speculated that the reason for this drop was that the U.S  CPI number, which was released yesterday, was below par .
Revised: Bombay Stock Exchange Analysts speculated that the reason for this drop was that the U.S . CPI number, which was released yesterday, was below par .
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Original: Bombay Stock Exchange Analysts speculated that the reason for this drop was that the U.S  CPI number, which was released yesterday, was below par .
Revised: Bombay Stock Exchange Analysts speculated that the reason for this drop was that the U.S CPI number, which was released yesterday, was above expectations .
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Original:  This, coupled with weaknesses observed in the London Metal Exchange  has led to losses in emerging markets like India, Mexico and Brazil.
Revised:  This, coupled with weaknesses observed in the London Metal Exchange , has led to losses in emerging markets like India, Mexico and Brazil.
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Original:  Asian Regional Strategist at JPMorgan, Adrian Mowat  believes that the Sensex will stabilise at around the 11,000 mark after correcting by around 5-6 \%.
Revised:  Asian Regional Strategist at JPMorgan, Adrian Mowat , believes that the Sensex will stabilise at around the 11,000 mark after correcting by around 5-6 \%.
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Original:  The main losers in today' ;
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Original:  The Bombay Stock Exchange Senstitive Index (Sensex) crashed 826 points and the National Stock Exchange's index (Nifty) 246 in what was the largest ever intra-day drop in the their histories.
Revised: Bombay Stock Exchange The Bombay Stock Exchange Senstitive Index (Sensex) crashed 826 points and the National Stock Exchange's index (Nifty) 246 in what was the largest ever intra-day drop in the their histories.
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Original:  Bombay Stock Exchange Analysts speculated that the reason for this drop was that the U.S. CPI number, which was released yesterday, was above expectations.
Revised:  Analysts speculated that the reason for this drop was that the U.S. CPI number, which was released yesterday, was above expectations.
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Original:  This, coupled with weaknesses observed in the London Metal Exchange, has led to losses in emerging markets like India, Mexico  and Brazil.
Revised:  This, coupled with weaknesses observed in the London Metal Exchange, has led to losses in emerging markets like India, Mexico , and Brazil.
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Original:  The main losers in today's crash were the steel and cement segments . sourc
Revised:  The main losers in today's crash were the steel and cement segments 
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Original:  Former Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi sent 3,000 troops to Iraq in 2003.
Revised:  Berlusconi sent 3,000 troops to Iraq in 2003.
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Original:  Although troops were  expected to return home by the end of 2006, Prodi did not give an exact timeframe for the withdrawal.
Revised:  Although troops were already expected to return home by the end of 2006, Prodi did not give an exact timeframe for the withdrawal.
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Original: In his first speech since being sworn in as prime minister , Italian Prime Minister Romano Prodi says the US-led invasion of Iraq had been a mistake.
Revised: In his first speech since being sworn in as the country's leader , Italian Prime Minister Romano Prodi says the US-led invasion of Iraq had been a mistake.
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Original:  The UN World Health Organization (WHO) says about 35,000 people are  ill, half of them in the capital of Luanda, where the first cases were detected in February.
Revised:  The UN World Health Organization (WHO) says about 35,000 people are ill, half the victims in the capital of Luanda, where the first cases were detected in February.
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