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Original:  He said the reach of the cartel stretches well into the United States  . Holder said that, in the last two days alone, law enforcement officials have seized nearly a ton of illegal narcotics, and hundreds of weapons and vehicles.
Revised:  He said the reach of the cartel stretches well into the US. . Holder said that, in the last two days alone, law enforcement officials have seized nearly a ton of illegal narcotics, and hundreds of weapons and vehicles.
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Original:  He  described the cartel as the most violent of Mexico's five drug cartels.
Revised:  He described the cartel as the "most violent" of the Mexico drug cartels.
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Original: According to Holder, the authorities seized 109 vehicles, 144 weapons, an unconfirmed quantity of methamphetamines , 137 pounds (62 kilograms) of cocaine, 967 pounds (439 kilograms) of marijuana, and US$3.4 million in cash after the raids.
Revised: According to Holder, the authorities seized 109 vehicles, 144 weapons, an unconfirmed quantity of methamphetamine , 137 pounds (62 kilograms) of cocaine, 967 pounds (439 kilograms) of marijuana, and US$3.4 million in cash after the raids.
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Original: This comes after a lengthy drought hit the region, also affecting the nearby countries of Kenya and Somalia.
Revised: This comes after a lengthy drought hit the region, also affecting the neighbouring countries of Kenya and Somalia.
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Original:  Droughts in Ethiopia can bring about especially disastrous effects, as the economy is dependent mainly on agriculture, and over four fifths of the popluation lives off the land
Revised:  Droughts in Ethiopia can bring about especially disastrous effects, as the economy is dependent mainly on agriculture, and over four fifths of the population lives off the land
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Original:  At least six people were killed and thirteen were injured, though some estimates take the number of deaths up to eight.
Revised:  At least six people were killed and thirteen were injured, although some estimates take the number of deaths up to eight.
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Original:  The suicide bomber was riding on a bicycle and entered the air force base and blew up himself at the security checkpoint which was used by both personnels and civilians.
Revised:  The suicide bomber was riding on a bicycle and entered the air force base and blew up himself at the security checkpoint which was used by both personnel and civilians.
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Original:  The bomber's body was divided into pieces and the police have found his legs, arms and face.
Revised:  The bomber's body was blasted into pieces and the police have found his legs, arms and face.
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Original:  They are not sure if Taliban and Al-Qaeda are behind this attack
Revised:  It is currently unclear whether the Taliban and Al-Qaeda are behind this attack
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Original:  The bomber's body was blasted into pieces and the police have found his legs, arms and face.
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Original: The suicide bomber  was riding on a bicycle and entered the air force base and blew up himself at the security checkpoint which was used by both personnel and civilians.
Revised: The suicide bomber was riding on a bicycle and blew up himself at the security checkpoint which was used by both personnel and civilians.
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Original: The suicide bomber  was riding on a bicycle and entered the air force base and blew up himself at the security checkpoint which was used by both personnel and civilians.
Revised: The suicide bomber was riding on a bicycle and entered the air force base and blew up himself at the base's security checkpoint, which was used by both personnel and civilians.
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Original:  At least six people were killed and thirteen were injured, although some estimates take the number of deaths up to eight.
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Original:  Nine other people were wounded whose identities haven't been disclosed, said Fakhar Sultan, District Police chief .
Revised:  Nine other people were wounded whose identities haven't been disclosed, said Fakhar Sultan, District Police chief 
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Original:  The suicide bomber, from an unknown organisation, was riding on a bicycle and blew up himself at the base's security checkpoint, which was used by both personnel and civilians .
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Original: The Air Force Base A suicide bomber attacked the Chaklala airbase in the Punjab province of northern Pakistan this morning, killing at least 4 civilians and 2 air force personnel at a security checkpoint.
Revised: The Air Force Base A suicide bomber attacked the Chaklala airbase in the Punjab province of northern Pakistan this morning, killing at least four civilians and two air force personnel at a security checkpoint.
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Original:  With some outlets reporting as many as eight deaths, between 9–13 people were believed wounded, although their identities haven't been disclosed, said Fakhar Sultan, District Police chief.
Revised:  With some outlets reporting as many as eight deaths, between nine and thirteen people were believed wounded, although their identities haven't been disclosed, said Fakhar Sultan, District Police chief.
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Original: The Air Force Base A suicide bomber attacked the Chaklala airbase in the Punjab province of northern Pakistan this morning, killing at least four civilians and two air force personnel at a security checkpoint.
Revised:  A suicide bomber attacked the Chaklala airbase in the Punjab province of northern Pakistan this morning, killing at least four civilians and two air force personnel at a security checkpoint.
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Original: Already known to have support for American causes like the War on Terror, Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper caused controversy this week after telling Toronto business leaders that he prefers to watch American news programmes instead of Canadian.
Revised:  Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper caused controversy this week after telling Toronto business leaders that he prefers to watch American news programmes instead of Canadian.
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Original:  The Star quoted NDP leader Jack Layton, stating "Perhaps if he watched Canadian news more often, he would understand the negative impact of his policies on Canadian families  And if he actually likes Fox News better than Canadian news, then Canadians ought to be concerned."
Revised:  The Star quoted NDP leader Jack Layton, stating "Perhaps if he watched Canadian news more often, he would understand the negative impact of his policies on Canadian families . And if he actually likes Fox News better than Canadian news, then Canadians ought to be concerned."
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Original:  The Toronto Star says his "words ring true" in light of the interviews he's given to American broadcasters like Fox News and CNN . Harper has been frequently antagonistic in his relationship with Canadian media .
Revised:  The Toronto Star says his "words ring true" in light of the interviews he's given to American broadcasters like Fox News and CNN .
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Original:  In a Q A on Wednesdayat the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention he claimed " I tend to watch mainly American news because I don't like to watch Canadian news and hear what Allan (Gregg) and everybody else is saying about me, so my hobby is to watch politics elsewhere . "  File:Harper with American Flag.
Revised:  A on Wednesdayat the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention he claimed " I tend to watch mainly American news because I don't like to watch Canadian news and hear what Allan (Gregg) and everybody else is saying about me, so my hobby is to watch politics elsewhere . " File:Harper with American Flag.
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Original:  In a Q A on Wednesdayat the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention he claimed " I tend to watch mainly American news because I don't like to watch Canadian news and hear what Allan (Gregg) and everybody else is saying about me, so my hobby is to watch politics elsewhere . "  File:Harper with American Flag.
Revised:  In a Q On Wednesday, he told the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention he claimed " I tend to watch mainly American news because I don't like to watch Canadian news and hear what Allan (Gregg) and everybody else is saying about me, so my hobby is to watch politics elsewhere . " File:Harper with American Flag.
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Original:  In a Q A on Wednesdayat the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention he claimed " I tend to watch mainly American news because I don't like to watch Canadian news and hear what Allan (Gregg) and everybody else is saying about me, so my hobby is to watch politics elsewhere . "  File:Harper with American Flag.
Revised:  In a Q A on Wednesdayat the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention that he watched " I tend to watch mainly American news because I don't like to watch Canadian news and hear what Allan (Gregg) and everybody else is saying about me, so my hobby is to watch politics elsewhere . " File:Harper with American Flag.
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Original:  In a Q A on Wednesdayat the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention he claimed " I tend to watch mainly American news because I don't like to watch Canadian news and hear what Allan (Gregg) and everybody else is saying about me, so my hobby is to watch politics elsewhere . "  File:Harper with American Flag.
Revised:  In a Q A on Wednesdayat the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention he claimed " mainly American news because I don't like to watch Canadian news and hear what Allan (Gregg) and everybody else is saying about me, so my hobby is to watch politics elsewhere . " File:Harper with American Flag.
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Original:  In a Q A on Wednesdayat the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention he claimed " I tend to watch mainly American news because I don't like to watch Canadian news and hear what Allan (Gregg) and everybody else is saying about me, so my hobby is to watch politics elsewhere . "  File:Harper with American Flag.
Revised:  In a Q A on Wednesdayat the Canadian Chamber of Commerce Convention he claimed " I tend to watch mainly American news " and suggested it was his hobby " to watch politics elsewhere . " File:Harper with American Flag.
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Original:  The Toronto Star says his " words ring true " in light of the interviews he's given to American broadcasters like Fox News and CNN.
Revised:  The Toronto Star says his " words ring true " 
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Original:  And if he actually likes Fox News better than Canadian news, then Canadians ought to be concerned . "  Liberal Bob Rae likewise pointed out that politicians "all have an obligation to know what's going on", and noted he found the admission "quite shocking".
Revised:  And if he actually likes Fox News better than Canadian news, then Canadians ought to be concerned " Liberal Bob Rae likewise pointed out that politicians "all have an obligation to know what's going on", and noted he found the admission "quite shocking".
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Original:  And if he actually likes Fox News better than Canadian news, then Canadians ought to be concerned . "  Liberal Bob Rae likewise pointed out that politicians "all have an obligation to know what's going on", and noted he found the admission "quite shocking".
Revised:  And if he actually likes Fox News better than Canadian news, then Canadians ought to be concerned . " . Liberal Bob Rae likewise pointed out that politicians "all have an obligation to know what's going on", and noted he found the admission "quite shocking".
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Original:  But Immigration Minister Jason Kenney said "I think the prime minister is too busy to sit there being vainglorious and watching himself on TV."
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Original:  Communications were restablished 16 minutes after the plane passed the airport  when controllers asked two other Northwest planes to try talking to the unresponsive jet   
Revised:  Communications were restablished 16 minutes after the plane passed the airport when controllers asked two other Northwest planes to try talking to the unresponsive jet . 
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Original:  The board has also recovered the cockpit voice recorder and flight data recorder, and both have been sent to Washington DC to be examined  
Revised:  The board has also recovered the cockpit voice recorder and flight data recorder, and both have been sent to Washington DC to be examined . 
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Original:  President Hamid Karzai Dr. Abdullah Abdullah U.S. President Barack Obama has said that the runoff reflects the will of the Afghan people and he may withhold his decision on U.S. troop levels in Afghanistan until after the new polls.
Revised:  President Hamid Karzai U.S. President Barack Obama has said that the runoff reflects the will of the Afghan people and he may withhold his decision on U.S. troop levels in Afghanistan until after the new polls.
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Original:  However Rick Nelson at the Center for Strategic and International Studies in Washington  says it is wrong to look at the Afghan political landscape through a Western lens.
Revised:  However Rick Nelson at the Center for Strategic and International Studies in Washington , D.C. says it is wrong to look at the Afghan political landscape through a Western lens.
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Original:  Hair from 16-year-old Brigitte Grenier's body was used to convict him and has since been linked to someone else   
Revised:  Hair from 16-year-old Brigitte Grenier's body was used to convict him and has since been linked to someone else . 
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Original:  Both were found guilty, with Unger's conviction helped by male hair recovered from the victim, which a forensics expert testified had come from the innocent man    
Revised:  Both were found guilty, with Unger's conviction helped by male hair recovered from the victim, which a forensics expert testified had come from the innocent man . 
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Original:  A retrial was ordered by Federal Justice Minister Rob Nicholson     
Revised:  A retrial was ordered by Federal Justice Minister Rob Nicholson . 
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Original:  He now lives in British Colombia .
Revised:  He now lives in British Columbia .
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Original:  He says of his confession to the men he thought were gangsters  was because he wanted to work for them: "When you're young, naive and desperate for money, they hold a lot of promises to you, so you say and do what you have to do to survive, just like in prison."
Revised:  He says of his confession to the men he thought were gangsters that it was because he wanted to work for them: "When you're young, naive and desperate for money, they hold a lot of promises to you, so you say and do what you have to do to survive, just like in prison."
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Original:  File:Downtown-winnipeg.jpg|Downtown Winnipeg seen from the The Forks The case began at a rock concert near Winnipeg on June 23, 1990.
Revised:  The case began at a rock concert near Winnipeg on June 23, 1990.
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Original: File:Downtown-winnipeg.jpg|325px|Downtown Winnipeg seen from the The Forks Canadian authorities have dropped charges against 38-year-old Kyle Unger, who has served more than a decade in jail for a murder he did not commit.
Revised:  Canadian authorities have dropped charges against 38-year-old Kyle Unger, who has served more than a decade in jail for a murder he did not commit.
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Original: Oleg Pesko, the chief of the Vnukovo Airport press center, said that the Airbus made a safe non-emergency landing at the Vnukovo airport just before 11.00 UTC.
Revised: Oleg Pesko, the chief of the Vnukovo airport press center, said that the Airbus made a safe non-emergency landing at the Vnukovo airport just before 11.00 UTC.
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Original: Oleg Pesko, the chief of the Vnukovo Airport press center, said that the Airbus made a safe non-emergency landing at the Vnukovo airport just before 11.00 UTC.
Revised: Oleg Pesko, the chief of the Vnukovo Airport press center, said that the Airbus made a safe non-emergency landing at the airport just before 11.00 UTC.
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Original:  We were only told where we were flying and what temperature it was outside," one passenger said, as quoted by the NTV news agency
Revised:  We were only told where we were and what temperature it was outside," one passenger said, as quoted by the NTV news agency
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Original:  Mugabe, however, dismissed the boycott, calling it a “non-event”, and said that his party would not alter its plans or yield to the demands of the MDC
Revised:  Mugabe, however, dismissed the boycott, calling it a “non-event”, and said that his party would not alter its plans or agree to the MDC's demands
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Original:  Mugabe, however, dismissed the boycott, calling it a “non-event”, and said that his party would not alter its plans or agree to the MDC's demands  
Revised:  Mugabe, however, dismissed the boycott, calling it a “non-event”, and said that his party would not alter its plans or agree to the MDC's demands . 
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Original:  Mugabe, however, dismissed the boycott, calling it a “non-event”, and said that his party would not alter its plans or agree to the MDC's demands  
Revised:  Mugabe, however, dismissed the boycott, calling it a “non-event”, and said that his party would not alter its plans or agree to the MDC's demands Related new
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Original:  Niger has asked for the bloc to reconsider the suspension  
Revised:  Niger has asked for the bloc to reconsider the suspension . 
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Original:  According to the US Geological Survey, the earthquake's epicentre was located 365 kilometers in the Banda Sea, southeast of Ambon  in the Maluku islands . Many people rushed to higher ground following the earthquake, fearing that a tsunami was generated, but the Pacific Tsunami Warning Centre said the quake was too deep below ground surface to cause any waves.
Revised:  According to the US Geological Survey, the earthquake's epicentre was located 365 kilometers into the Banda Sea, southeast of Ambon in the Maluku islands . Many people rushed to higher ground following the earthquake, fearing that a tsunami was generated, but the Pacific Tsunami Warning Centre said the quake was too deep below ground surface to cause any waves.
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Original:  According to the US Geological Survey, the earthquake's epicentre was located 365 kilometers in the Banda Sea, southeast of Ambon  in the Maluku islands . Many people rushed to higher ground following the earthquake, fearing that a tsunami was generated, but the Pacific Tsunami Warning Centre said the quake was too deep below ground surface to cause any waves.
Revised:  According to the US Geological Survey, the earthquake's epicentre was located 365 kilometers in the Banda Sea, southeast of Ambon Island in the Maluku islands . Many people rushed to higher ground following the earthquake, fearing that a tsunami was generated, but the Pacific Tsunami Warning Centre said the quake was too deep below ground surface to cause any waves.
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Original:  According to the US Geological Survey, the earthquake's epicentre was located 365 kilometers in the Banda Sea, southeast of Ambon  in the Maluku islands . Many people rushed to higher ground following the earthquake, fearing that a tsunami was generated, but the Pacific Tsunami Warning Centre said the quake was too deep below ground surface to cause any waves.
Revised:  According to the US Geological Survey, the earthquake's epicentre was located 365 kilometers in the Banda Sea, southeast of Ambon in the Maluku Islands . Many people rushed to higher ground following the earthquake, fearing that a tsunami was generated, but the Pacific Tsunami Warning Centre said the quake was too deep below ground surface to cause any waves.
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Original:  According to the US Geological Survey, the earthquake's epicentre was located 365 kilometers in the Banda Sea, southeast of Ambon  in the Maluku islands . Many people rushed to higher ground following the earthquake, fearing that a tsunami was generated, but the Pacific Tsunami Warning Centre said the quake was too deep below ground surface to cause any waves.
Revised:  According to the US Geological Survey, the earthquake's epicentre was located 365 kilometers in the Banda Sea, southeast of Ambon in the Maluku islands . Many people rushed to higher ground following the earthquake, fearing that a tsunami was generated, but the Pacific Tsunami Warning Centre said the quake was too deep below the surface to cause any waves.
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Original:  Production of antiviral vaccines has been slower than initially predicted, and it likely that the US government's targets for delivery won't be met by drug makers, according to Thomas Frieden, the director of the Centers for Disease Control . Category:Barack Obama Category:United Stat
Revised:  Production of antiviral vaccines has been slower than initially predicted, and it likely that the US government's targets for delivery won't be met by drug makers, according to Thomas Frieden, the director of the Centers for Disease Control Category:Barack Obama Category:United Stat
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Original:  Production of antiviral vaccines has been slower than initially predicted, and it likely that the US government's targets for delivery won't be met by drug makers, according to Thomas Frieden, the director of the Centers for Disease Control . Category:Barack Obama Category:United Stat
Revised:  Production of antiviral vaccines has been slower than initially predicted, and it likely that the US government's targets for delivery won't be met by drug makers, according to Thomas Frieden, the director of the Centers for Disease Control . 
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Original: Obama signed a declaration late on Friday, which authorised Kathleen Sebelius , the Health and Human Services Secretary, to bypass federal rules in order to allow health officials to respond more efficiently to the outbreak of the H1N1 virus.
Revised: Obama signed a declaration late on Friday, authorising health secretary Kathleen Sebelius to bypass some federal rules, in order to allow health officials to respond more efficiently to the outbreak of the H1N1 virus.
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Original: Obama signed a declaration late on Friday, which authorised Kathleen Sebelius , the Health and Human Services Secretary, to bypass federal rules in order to allow health officials to respond more efficiently to the outbreak of the H1N1 virus.
Revised: Obama signed a declaration late on Friday, which authorised Kathleen Sebelius , the Health and Human Services Secretary, to bypass federal rules in order to let health officials respond more efficiently to the outbreak of the H1N1 virus.
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Original:  The move is aimed at making it less difficult for people affected by the virus to seek treatment, and allow medical providers to give it immediately, bypassing  health privacy regulations or other potential hurdles . Swine flu has now been circulated in 46 of the 50 US states, and has resulted in at least 411 confirmed deaths since the end of August.
Revised:  The move is aimed at making it less difficult for people affected by the virus to seek treatment, and allow medical providers to give it immediately, bypassing potential hurdles such as health privacy regulations or other potential hurdles . Swine flu has now been circulated in 46 of the 50 US states, and has resulted in at least 411 confirmed deaths since the end of August.
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