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Original:  It is suspected  that civilians on the ground may have died, but as of yet there is no official death toll of non passengers . Jose Bernales, the Commander of IV region, and his wife also died in the crash   SAN-100 was very old and belonged to Panama for 35 years  . "It was a flying relic ", Torrijos Paunzer, the brother of Panama's President, said .
Revised:  It is suspected that civilians on the ground may have died, but as of yet there is no official death toll of non passengers . Jose Bernales, the Commander of IV region, and his wife also died in the crash SAN-100 was very old and belonged to Panama for 35 years . "It was a flying relic ," said Torrijos Paunzer, the brother of Panama's President, said .
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Original:  It is suspected  that civilians on the ground may have died, but as of yet there is no official death toll of non passengers . Jose Bernales, the Commander of IV region, and his wife also died in the crash   SAN-100 was very old and belonged to Panama for 35 years  . "It was a flying relic ", Torrijos Paunzer, the brother of Panama's President, said .
Revised:  It is suspected that civilians on the ground may have died, but as of yet there is no official death toll of non passengers . Jose Bernales, the Commander of IV region, and his wife also died in the crash SAN-100 was very old and belonged to Panama for 35 years . "It was a flying relic ", Torrijos Paunzer, the brother of Panama's president .
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Original:  Telemetro also reported the chopper had a broken part that was due to be replaced on June 4th
Revised:  Telemetro also reported the chopper had a broken part that was due to be replaced on June 4
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Original: A helicopter named SAN-100 crashed yesterday at 14:00 local time ( 9 :00 UTC) on a roof in Banana Price, Calidonia, Panama City, Panama.
Revised: A helicopter named SAN-100 crashed yesterday at 14:00 local time ( 09 :00 UTC) on a roof in Banana Price, Calidonia, Panama City, Panama.
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Original:  "It was a flying relic," said Torrijos Paunzer , the brother of Panama's president.
Revised:  "It was a flying relic," said Torrijos Pauzner , the brother of Panama's president.
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Original:  Telemetro also reported the chopper had a broken part that was due to be replaced on June 4 
Revised:  Telemetro also reported the chopper had a broken part that was due to be replaced on June 4. 
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Original:  "It was a flying relic," said  Torrijos Pauzner, the brother of Panama's president.
Revised:  "It was a flying relic," said Omar Torrijos Pauzner, the brother of Panama's president.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An estimated 500 natives live in the area near the Envira River, which is being threatened by commercial logging operations.
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Original:  Countries who    boycotted the ban include the United States, Russia, Israel, Pakistan and India   
Revised:  Countries who boycotted the ban , including the United States, Russia, Israel, Pakistan and India 
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Original: Today  representatives of 111 countries have adopted a formal ban on cluster bombs.
Revised: Today , representatives of 111 countries have adopted a formal ban on cluster bombs.
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Original:  The ban is to be signed and ratified by each country on December 2-3 in Oslo, Norway, the country that initiated the discussions on the ban.
Revised:  The ban is to be signed and ratified by each country during December 2-3 in Oslo, Norway, the country that initiated the discussions on the ban.
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Original:  The w:Airbus 390 bore 192 people onboard, counting both passengers and crew.
Revised:  The w:Airbus 390 held 192 people onboard, counting both passengers and crew.
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Original:  The w:Airbus 390 bore 192 people onboard, counting both passengers and crew.
Revised:  The w:Airbus 390 bore 192 people on board, including both passengers and crew.
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Original:  It fell to the city streets while approaching the runway , at 9:45 local time (15:45 GMT).
Revised:  It fell to the city streets while approaching the runway at 9:45 local time (15:45 GMT).
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Original:  Airport Closure According to statements by the president of Honduras, Manuel Zelaya, after the accident the airport could be closed and its flights rerouted through Palmerola Air Bas
Revised:  Airport Closure According to statements by the president of Honduras, Manuel Zelaya, after the accident the airport would be closed and its flights rerouted through Palmerola Air Bas
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Original:  The w:Airbus 390 held 192 people on board , including both passengers and crew .
Revised:  The w:Airbus 390 held 192 people on board including both passengers and crew .
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Original:  The w: Airbus 390 held dozens of people on board including both passengers and crew, although various accounts are inconsistently reporting occupant numbers  .
Revised:  The Airbus 390 held dozens of people on board including both passengers and crew, although various accounts are inconsistently reporting occupant numbers .
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Original: Quotes Sporting Director Christian Hochstatter, Hannover 96 Sporting Director: "We are very happy that we could persuade Mikael to join Hannover."
Revised: Quotes Christian Hochstatter, Hannover 96 Sporting Director: "We are very happy that we could persuade Mikael to join Hannover."
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Original:  Birmingham Head Coach Alex McLeish believes that, despite the transfer of Forssell to Hannover 96, his squad will have enough goalscoring to challenge for an immediate return to the FA Premier League for the 2009-10 season   .
Revised:  Birmingham Head Coach Alex McLeish believes that, despite the transfer of Forssell to Hannover 96, his squad will have enough goalscoring to challenge for an immediate return to the FA Premier League for the 2009-10 season . .
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Original: For Forssell, The transfer ends an association with English football wich lastd 10 years.
Revised: For Forssell, The transfer ends an association with English football which lasted 10 years.
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Original:  The article needs a editorial clean up and I think that it can be published then.
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Original:  The bribes were where used to collect founds for the Worker's Party and for sel-enrichment.
Revised:  The bribes were allegedly used to collect founds for the Worker's Party and for sel-enrichment.
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Original:  And at least six witnesses died in suspicious situations.
Revised:  At least six witnesses died in suspicious situations.
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Original:  The Social Security Minister Romero Jucá has been accused of having supposedly offered seven non-existent farms as guarantee for a financing from the Banco of Amazonia, among other denunciations of misuse of public loans.
Revised:  The Social Security Minister Romero Jucá has been accused of having offered seven non-existent farms as guarantee for a financing from the Banco of Amazonia, among other denunciations of misuse of public loans.
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Original: A series of denunciations of political corruption threaten the Brazilian government.
Revised: Denunciations of political corruption threaten the Brazilian government.
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Original:  The case was known in 2004 after a businessman revealed a tape in which exposing Diniz.
Revised:  The case was known in 2004 after a businessman revealed a tape exposing Diniz.
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Original:  Waldomiro was an adviser of the Ministery of Civilian Household, directed by the Minister José Dirceu, and president of Loterj (which administers the lotteries of the state of the Rio de Janeiro) from February, 2001 until December, 2002.
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Original:  A recorded audio tape by the businessman Carlos Augusto Ramos, known as Carlinhos Cachoeira, shows him being suposely being extorted by Waldomiro Diniz.
Revised:  The recorded audio tape by the businessman Carlos Augusto Ramos, known as Carlinhos Cachoeira, shows him being suposely being extorted by Waldomiro Diniz.
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Original: Korman, who started his career on Broadway in New York city was famous for and won awards for his appearances on the Carol Burnett Show in the 1960's and 70's.
Revised: Korman, who started his career on Broadway in New York City was famous for and won awards for his appearances on the Carol Burnett Show in the 1960's and 70's.
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Original: American comedian Harvey Kroman has died at the age of 81, according to a statement released by his family.
Revised: American comedian Harvey Korman has died at the age of 81, according to a statement released by his family.
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Original:  It was a miracle in itself that he survived the incident at all  " said Korman's daughter, Katherine Korman  in a statement to the press.
Revised:  It was a miracle in itself that he survived the incident at all , " said Korman's daughter, Katherine Korman in a statement to the press.
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Original:  It was a miracle in itself that he survived the incident at all  " said Korman's daughter, Katherine Korman  in a statement to the press.
Revised:  It was a miracle in itself that he survived the incident at all " said Korman's daughter, Katherine Korman , in a statement to the press.
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Original:  Korman, who started his career on Broadway in New York City  was famous for and won awards for his appearances on the Carol Burnett Show in the 1960's and 70's.
Revised:  Korman, who started his career on Broadway in New York City , was famous for and won awards for his appearances on the Carol Burnett Show in the 1960's and 70's.
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Original:  He also was a starring actor in the film Blazing Sattles as well as other movies made by Mel Brooks.
Revised:  He also was a starring actor in the film Blazing Saddles as well as other movies made by Mel Brooks.
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Original:  As a result of his work on television, Korman was nominated for seven Emmy Awards, but has won a total of four which he won for he work on the Carol Burnett Show
Revised:  As a result of his work on television, Korman was nominated for seven Emmy Awards, but won a total of four which he won for he work on the Carol Burnett Show
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Original:  As a result of his work on television, Korman was nominated for seven Emmy Awards, but has won a total of four which he won for he work on the Carol Burnett Show
Revised:  As a result of his work on television, Korman was nominated for seven Emmy Awards, but has won a total of four for his work on the Carol Burnett Show
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Original: United Nations Deputy Secretary-General Asha-Rose Migiro cited priority 5 of the Millennium Development Goals (MDGs) - preventing women ’ s deaths during pregnancy and childbirth as a serious challenge.
Revised: United Nations Deputy Secretary-General Asha-Rose Migiro cited priority 5 of the Millennium Development Goals (MDGs) - preventing women ' s deaths during pregnancy and childbirth as a serious challenge.
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Original:  Orbital insertion will follow in about thirty minutes time, via a firing of Discovery's OMS engines  .
Revised:  Orbital insertion followed about thirty minutes time, via a firing of Discovery's OMS engines .
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Original:  Orbital insertion will follow in about thirty minutes time, via a firing of Discovery's OMS engines  .
Revised:  Orbital insertion will follow in about thirty minutes later, with a firing of Discovery's OMS engines .
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Original:   This is the 123rd Space Shuttle mission, and the 35th to be flown by Discovery '' . Ten further missions are planned, including two contingency logistics flights, prior to the Shuttle's retirement in 2010.
Revised:  This is the 123rd Space Shuttle mission, and the 35th to be flown by Discovery . Ten further missions are planned, including two contingency logistics flights, prior to the Shuttle's retirement in 2010.
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Original:  This is the fourth manned, and 27th orbital launch of 2008     
Revised:  This is the fourth manned, and 27th orbital launch of 2008. 
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Original: Reaction At a press conference following launch, NASA Administrator Mike Griffin stated that it was "a huge day for the space station partnership", and that the International Space Station was "a place in orbit where we can learn to live and work in space".
Revised:  At a press conference following launch, NASA Administrator Mike Griffin stated that it was "a huge day for the space station partnership", and that the International Space Station was "a place in orbit where we can learn to live and work in space".
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Original:  Owing to the size of the payload, there was no room in Discovery's''' payload bay for the Orbiter Boom Sensor System (OBSS), a safety device used primarily to inspect the Shuttle Orbiter's heat sheild .
Revised:  Owing to the size of the payload, there was no room in Discovery's''' payload bay for the Orbiter Boom Sensor System (OBSS), a safety device used primarily to inspect the Shuttle Orbiter's heat shield .
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Original:  Fuelling was completed, and topping up of cryogenic propellent began, at 15:36.
Revised:  Fuelling was completed, and topping up of cryogenic propellant began, at 15:36.
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Original: Fuelling of Discovery's External Tank in preparation for launch began at 11:50 GMT. By 12:50, it had been confirmed that initial tests on Engine Cutoff (ECO) sensors in the External Tank had been conducted successfully.
Revised: Fueling of Discovery's External Tank in preparation for launch began at 11:50 GMT. By 12:50, it had been confirmed that initial tests on Engine Cutoff (ECO) sensors in the External Tank had been conducted successfully.
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Original:  155 associations voted in favor of a resolution supporting the objectives of rules that would require clubs to start all matches with at least six players who are eligible for the national team.
Revised:  155 associations voted in favor of supporting the objectives of rules that would require clubs to start all matches with at least six players who are eligible for the national team.
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Original:  155 associations voted in favor of a resolution supporting the objectives of rules that would require clubs to start all matches with at least six players who are eligible for the national team.
Revised:  155 associations voted in favor of a resolution supporting the objectives of rules that would require clubs to start all matches with at least 6 players who are eligible for the national team.
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Original:  Aston Villa7866Everton F.C. v Newcastle United456
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Original:  155 associations voted in favor of supporting the objectives of rules that would require clubs to start all matches with at least 6 players who are eligible for the national team.
Revised:  155 associations voted in support for the objectives of rules that would require clubs to start all matches with at least 6 players who are eligible for the national team.
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Original:  155 associations voted in favor of supporting the objectives of rules that would require clubs to start all matches with at least 6 players who are eligible for the national team.
Revised:  155 associations voted in favor of supporting the objectives of the 6+5 Rule that would require clubs to start all matches with at least 6 players who are eligible for the national team.
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Original:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008  , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA),  Industrial Development Bureau of  Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum,  will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
Revised:  Leading up to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008 , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), Industrial Development Bureau of Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum, will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
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Original:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008  , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA),  Industrial Development Bureau of  Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum,  will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
Revised:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008 show , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), Industrial Development Bureau of Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum, will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
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Original:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008  , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA),  Industrial Development Bureau of  Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum,  will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
Revised:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008 , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" is being held. Co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), Industrial Development Bureau of Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum, will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
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Original:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008  , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA),  Industrial Development Bureau of  Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum,  will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
Revised:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008 , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), the Industrial Development Bureau of Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum, will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
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Original:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008  , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA),  Industrial Development Bureau of  Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum,  will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
Revised:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008 , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), Industrial Development Bureau of the Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum, will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
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Original:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008  , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA),  Industrial Development Bureau of  Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum,  will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
Revised:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008 , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), Industrial Development Bureau of Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum, the expo will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
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Original:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008  , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA),  Industrial Development Bureau of  Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum,  will be held in Taipei Show Hall 2 for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
Revised:  Prior to the 2008 COMPUTEX 2008 , the "2008 WiMAX Expo Taipei" , co-organized by Taiwan External Trade Development Council, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), Industrial Development Bureau of Ministry of Economic Affairs (MOEA), M-Taiwan Office, and WiMAX Forum, will be held in Taipei Show Hall two. It is planned to run for five consecutive days commencing on June 2.
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Original: Since the MOEA signed the extended Memorandum of Understanding (MOU) with Intel  to promote the WiMAX industry in Taiwan jointly on April 21, Intel, a participant of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Expo Taipei, will not only demonstrate WiMAX solutions by customized WiMAX Segways during the show, but also hold the 2008 e21FORUM to forecast the future of Mobile Web 2.0 era on June 3.
Revised: Following the Ministry of Economic Affairs signing an extended Memorandum of Understanding (MOU) with Intel to promote the WiMAX industry in Taiwan jointly on April 21, Intel, a participant of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Expo Taipei, will not only demonstrate WiMAX solutions by customized WiMAX Segways during the show, but also hold the 2008 e21FORUM to forecast the future of Mobile Web 2.0 era on June 3.
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Original: Since the MOEA signed the extended Memorandum of Understanding (MOU) with Intel  to promote the WiMAX industry in Taiwan jointly on April 21, Intel, a participant of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Expo Taipei, will not only demonstrate WiMAX solutions by customized WiMAX Segways during the show, but also hold the 2008 e21FORUM to forecast the future of Mobile Web 2.0 era on June 3.
Revised: Since the MOEA signed the extended Memorandum of Understanding (MOU) with Intel on April 21, both will work together to promote the WiMAX industry in Taiwan jointly on April 21, Intel, a participant of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Expo Taipei, will not only demonstrate WiMAX solutions by customized WiMAX Segways during the show, but also hold the 2008 e21FORUM to forecast the future of Mobile Web 2.0 era on June 3.
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Original: Since the MOEA signed the extended Memorandum of Understanding (MOU) with Intel  to promote the WiMAX industry in Taiwan jointly on April 21, Intel, a participant of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Expo Taipei, will not only demonstrate WiMAX solutions by customized WiMAX Segways during the show, but also hold the 2008 e21FORUM to forecast the future of Mobile Web 2.0 era on June 3.
Revised: Since the MOEA signed the extended Memorandum of Understanding (MOU) with Intel to promote the WiMAX industry in Taiwan . Intel, participating in both COMPUTEX and the WiMAX expo has a number of WiMAX Segways to demonstrate the technology. Their involvement will also include acting as hosts for the 2008 e21FORUM to forecast the future of Mobile Web 2.0 era on June 3.
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Original: Since the MOEA signed the extended Memorandum of Understanding (MOU) with Intel  to promote the WiMAX industry in Taiwan jointly on April 21, Intel, a participant of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Expo Taipei, will not only demonstrate WiMAX solutions by customized WiMAX Segways during the show, but also hold the 2008 e21FORUM to forecast the future of Mobile Web 2.0 era on June 3.
Revised: Since the MOEA signed the extended Memorandum of Understanding (MOU) with Intel to promote the WiMAX industry in Taiwan jointly on April 21, Intel, a participant of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Expo Taipei, will not only demonstrate WiMAX solutions by customized WiMAX Segways during the show, but also hold the 2008 e21FORUM where Mobile Web 2.0 era on June 3.
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