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Original:  ]  ]  Career Coming soon Personal life Coming soon Category:1992     births Category:Canadian Artist Category:French Canadian Category: Universite de quebec a Montreal allumni Category:21st century Digital visual art Category: People from Repentigny, Quebec Category:Living people Category: Artist from Quebec Category:Canadian Artist Category:Quebec people Category:Canadian women activi
Revised:  ] ] Career Coming soon Personal life Coming soon Category:1992 births Category:Canadian Artist Category:French Canadian Category: Universite de quebec a Montreal allumni Category:21st century Digital People from Repentigny, Quebec Category:Living people Category: Artist from Quebec Category:Canadian Artist Category:Quebec people Category:Canadian women activi
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Original: Hélène Boudreau (born June 19, 1969 ) is an Acadian artist and author of children's books, whose writing has appeared in various Canadian publications and her Maritime-themed art has been exhibited by the Toronto Public Library and other local vicinities.
Revised: Hélène Boudreau (born June 19, 1969 ) is an 
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Original:  A major study into water use by agriculture, known as the Comprehensive Assessment of Water Management in Agriculture, coordinated by the International Water Management Institute, noted a close correlation between hunger, poverty  and water.
Revised:  A major study into water use by agriculture, known as the Comprehensive Assessment of Water Management in Agriculture, coordinated by the International Water Management Institute, noted a close correlation between hunger, poverty , and water.
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Original:  The authors considered that managing rainwater and soil moisture more effectively , and using supplemental and small-scale irrigation , held the key to helping the greatest number of poor people.
Revised:  Managing rainwater and soil moisture more effectively , and using supplemental and small-scale irrigation , held the key to helping the greatest number of poor people.
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Original:  The authors considered that managing rainwater and soil moisture more effectively , and using supplemental and small-scale irrigation , held the key to helping the greatest number of poor people.
Revised:  The authors considered that managing rainwater and soil moisture more effectively and using supplemental and small-scale irrigation , held the key to helping the greatest number of poor people.
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Original:  The authors considered that managing rainwater and soil moisture more effectively , and using supplemental and small-scale irrigation , held the key to helping the greatest number of poor people.
Revised:  The authors considered that managing rainwater and soil moisture more effectively , and using supplemental and small-scale irrigation is believed to hold the key to helping the greatest number of poor people.
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Original:  The importance of rainfed agriculture varies regionally  but produces most food for poor communities in developing countries.
Revised:  The importance of rainfed agriculture varies regionally , but produces most food for poor communities in developing countries.
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Original:  In subSaharan Africa more than 95\% of the farmed land is rainfed, while the corresponding figure for Latin America is almost 90\%, for South Asia about 60\%, for East Asia 65\% and for the Near East and North Africa 75\%.
Revised:  In sub-Saharan Africa more than 95\% of the farmed land is rainfed, while the corresponding figure for Latin America is almost 90\%, for South Asia about 60\%, for East Asia 65\% and for the Near East and North Africa 75\%.
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Original:  Over 45\% of the world’s hungry and more than 70\% of its malnourished children live in the SAT  There is a correlation between poverty, hunger and water stress.
Revised:  Over 45\% of the world’s hungry and more than 70\% of its malnourished children live in the SAT . There is a correlation between poverty, hunger and water stress.
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Original:  In developing countries rainfed grain yields are on average 1.5 t/ha , compared with 3.1 t/ha for irrigated yields (Rosegrant et al., 2002), and increase in production from rainfed agriculture has mainly originated from land expansion.
Revised:  In developing countries rainfed grain yields are on average 1.5 hectare , compared with 3.1 t/ha for irrigated yields (Rosegrant et al., 2002), and increase in production from rainfed agriculture has mainly originated from land expansion.
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Original:  In developing countries rainfed grain yields are on average 1.5 t/ha , compared with 3.1 t/ha for irrigated yields (Rosegrant et al., 2002), and increase in production from rainfed agriculture has mainly originated from land expansion.
Revised:  In developing countries rainfed grain yields are on average 1.5 t/ha , compared with 3.1 t/ha for irrigated yields , and increase in production from rainfed agriculture has mainly originated from land expansion.
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Original:  With 99\% rainfed production of main cereals such as maize, millet and sorghum, the cultivated cereal area in sub-Saharan Africa has doubled since 1960 while the yield per unit of land has been nearly stagnant for these staple crops (FAOSTAT, 2005) .
Revised:  With 99\% rainfed production of main cereals such as maize, millet and sorghum, the cultivated cereal area in sub-Saharan Africa has doubled since 1960 while the yield per unit of land has been nearly stagnant for these staple crops .
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Original:  In South Asia, there has been a major shift away from more drought-tolerant, low-yielding crops such as sorghum and millet, while wheat and maize has approximately doubled in area since 1961 (FAOSTAT, 2005).
Revised:  In South Asia, there has been a major shift away from more drought-tolerant, low-yielding crops such as sorghum and millet, while wheat and maize has approximately doubled in area since 1961.
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Original:  During the same period, the yield per unit of land for maize and wheat has more than doubled (Fig. 1.2).
Revised:  During the same period, the yield per unit of land for maize and wheat has more than doubled .
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Original:  Rainfed maize yield differs substantially between regions (Fig. 1.2a).
Revised:  Rainfed maize yield differs substantially between regions .
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Original:  In Latin America (including the Caribbean) it exceeds 3 t/ha , while in South Asia it is around 2 t/ha and in subSaharan Africa it only just exceeds 1 t/ha . This can be compared with maize yields in the USA or southern Europe, which normally amount to approximately 7–10 t/ha (most maize in these regions is irrigated).
Revised:  In Latin America (including the Caribbean) it exceeds 3 t/ha , while in South Asia it is around 2 t/ha and in subSaharan Africa it only just exceeds 1 hectare . This can be compared with maize yields in the USA or southern Europe, which normally amount to approximately 7–10 t/ha (most maize in these regions is irrigated).
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Original:  In Latin America (including the Caribbean) it exceeds 3 t/ha , while in South Asia it is around 2 t/ha and in subSaharan Africa it only just exceeds 1 t/ha . This can be compared with maize yields in the USA or southern Europe, which normally amount to approximately 7–10 t/ha (most maize in these regions is irrigated).
Revised:  In Latin America (including the Caribbean) it exceeds 3 t/ha , while in South Asia it is around 2 t/ha and in subSaharan Africa it only just exceeds 1 t/ha . This can be compared with maize yields in the USA or southern Europe, which normally amount to approximately 7–10 hectare (most maize in these regions is irrigated).
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Original:  The average regional yield per unit of land for wheat in Latin America (including the Caribbean) and South Asia is similar to the average yield output of 2.5–2.7 t/ha in North America (Fig. 1.2b).
Revised:  The average regional yield per unit of land for wheat in Latin America (including the Caribbean) and South Asia is similar to the average yield output of 2.5–2.7 t/ha in North America .
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Original:  In comparison, wheat yield in Western Europe is approximately twice as large (5 t/ha ), while in sub-Saharan Africa it remains below 2 t/ha . In view of the historic regional difference in development of yields, there appears to exist a significant potential for raised yields in rainfed agriculture, particularly in sub-Saharan Africa and South Asia.
Revised:  In comparison, wheat yield in Western Europe is approximately twice as large (5 hectare ), while in sub-Saharan Africa it remains below 2 t/ha . In view of the historic regional difference in development of yields, there appears to exist a significant potential for raised yields in rainfed agriculture, particularly in sub-Saharan Africa and South Asia.
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Original:  In comparison, wheat yield in Western Europe is approximately twice as large (5 t/ha ), while in sub-Saharan Africa it remains below 2 t/ha . In view of the historic regional difference in development of yields, there appears to exist a significant potential for raised yields in rainfed agriculture, particularly in sub-Saharan Africa and South Asia.
Revised:  In comparison, wheat yield in Western Europe is approximately twice as large (5 t/ha ), while in sub-Saharan Africa it remains below 2 hectare . In view of the historic regional difference in development of yields, there appears to exist a significant potential for raised yields in rainfed agriculture, particularly in sub-Saharan Africa and South Asia.
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Original:   Rural development through sustainable management of land and water resources gives a plausible solution for alleviating rural poverty and improving the livelihoods of the rural poor.
Revised:  Solution Rural development through sustainable management of land and water resources gives a plausible solution for alleviating rural poverty and improving the livelihoods of the rural poor.
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Original:   While absolute grain yield variations exist between different global locations as cited in this article , the potential for improved rain fed grain yields may be less than is suggested by a comparison between sub-Saharan and European locations for example, this applies particularly in areas where grain yield is primarily determined by the growing season rainfall.
Revised:  Formula While absolute grain yield variations exist between different global locations as cited in this article , the potential for improved rain fed grain yields may be less than is suggested by a comparison between sub-Saharan and European locations for example, this applies particularly in areas where grain yield is primarily determined by the growing season rainfall.
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Original:   While absolute grain yield variations exist between different global locations as cited in this article , the potential for improved rain fed grain yields may be less than is suggested by a comparison between sub-Saharan and European locations for example, this applies particularly in areas where grain yield is primarily determined by the growing season rainfall.
Revised:  While absolute grain yield variations exist between different global locations , the potential for improved rain fed grain yields may be less than is suggested by a comparison between sub-Saharan and European locations for example, this applies particularly in areas where grain yield is primarily determined by the growing season rainfall.
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Original:  A more accurate formula for measuring yield potential is y x a = X, where X is grain yield in Kg/hectare, y is millimetres of growing season rainfall and a is the variable yield factor, a number that may vary somewhere between 5 and 20.
Revised:  A more accurate formula for measuring yield potential is where is grain yield in Kg/hectare, y is millimetres of growing season rainfall and a is the variable yield factor, a number that may vary somewhere between 5 and 20.
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Original:  A more accurate formula for measuring yield potential is y x a = X, where X is grain yield in Kg/hectare, y is millimetres of growing season rainfall and a is the variable yield factor, a number that may vary somewhere between 5 and 20.
Revised:  A more accurate formula for measuring yield potential is y x a = X, where X is grain yield in , is millimeters of growing season rainfall and a is the variable yield factor, a number that may vary somewhere between 5 and 20.
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Original:  Thus assuming a variable yield factor of 15 and a growing season rainfall of 220mm the formula would express as 220mm x 15 = 3300 kg/ha yield potential.
Revised:  Thus assuming a variable yield factor of 15 and a growing season rainfall of 220mm the formula would express as yield potential.
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Original: The term Rainfed agriculture is  used to describe farming practices that rely on rainfall for water.
Revised:  Rainfed agriculture is used to describe farming practices that rely on rainfall for water.
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Original: The term Rainfed agriculture is  used to describe farming practices that rely on rainfall for water.
Revised: The term Rainfed agriculture is a term used to describe farming practices that rely on rainfall for water.
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Original:  For example, rainfed agriculture accounts for more than 95\% of farmed land in sub-Saharan Africa, 90\% in Latin America, 75\% in the Near East and North Africa ;
Revised:  For example, rainfed agriculture accounts for more than 95\% of farmed land in sub-Saharan Africa, 90\% in Latin America, 75\% in the Near East and North Africa ,
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Original:  65\% in East Asia  and 60\% in South Asia.
Revised:  65\% in East Asia , and 60\% in South Asia.
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Original: Rainfed agriculture is a term used to describe farming practices that rely on rainfall for water.
Revised: Rainfed agriculture is a type of farming that relies on rainfall for water.
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Original:   Hunger and water correlation There is a correlation between poverty, hunger, and water stress.
Revised:  Rainfed agriculture is distinguished in most of the literature from irrigated agriculture, which applies water from other sources, such as freshwater from streams, rivers and lakes or groundwater. Especially, as farmers become more aware of and develop better water resource management strategies, especially in light to climate change adaptation strategies, most agriculture exists on a spectrum between rainfed and irrigated agriculture. Hunger and water correlation There is a correlation between poverty, hunger, and water stress.
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Original:  In developing countries rainfed grain yields are on average 1.5 hectare, compared with 3.1 hectare for irrigated yields, and increase in production from rainfed agriculture has mainly originated from land expansion .
Revised:  In developing countries rainfed grain yields are on average 1.5 hectare, compared with 3.1 hectare for irrigated yields, and increase in production from rainfed agriculture has mainly originated from land expansion 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Solution Rural development through sustainable management of land and water resources gives a plausible solution for alleviating rural poverty and improving the livelihoods of the rural poor.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Rural development through sustainable management of land and water resources gives a plausible solution for alleviating rural poverty and improving the livelihoods of the rural poor.
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Original:  Especially, as farmers become more aware of and develop better water resource management strategies, especially in light to climate change adaptation strategies, most agriculture exists on a spectrum between rainfed and irrigated agriculture.
Revised:  As farmers become more aware of and develop better water resource management strategies, especially in light to climate change adaptation strategies, most agriculture exists on a spectrum between rainfed and irrigated agriculture.
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Original:  Especially, as farmers become more aware of and develop better water resource management strategies, especially in light to climate change adaptation strategies, most agriculture exists on a spectrum between rainfed and irrigated agriculture.
Revised:  Especially, as farmers become more aware of and develop better water resource management strategies, especially in light of climate change adaptation strategies, most agriculture exists on a spectrum between rainfed and irrigated agriculture.
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Original:  These countries coincide closely with those located in the semi-arid and dry sub-humid hydroclimates in the world , i.e.  savanna and steppe ecosystems  , where rainfed agriculture is the dominating source of food and where water constitutes a key limiting factor to crop growth.
Revised:  These countries coincide closely with those located in the semi-arid and dry sub-humid hydroclimates in the world ( i.e. savanna and steppe ecosystems , where rainfed agriculture is the dominating source of food and where water constitutes a key limiting factor to crop growth.
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Original:  These countries coincide closely with those located in the semi-arid and dry sub-humid hydroclimates in the world , i.e.  savanna and steppe ecosystems  , where rainfed agriculture is the dominating source of food and where water constitutes a key limiting factor to crop growth.
Revised:  These countries coincide closely with those located in the semi-arid and dry sub-humid hydroclimates in the world , i.e. , savanna and steppe ecosystems , where rainfed agriculture is the dominating source of food and where water constitutes a key limiting factor to crop growth.
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Original:  These countries coincide closely with those located in the semi-arid and dry sub-humid hydroclimates in the world , i.e.  savanna and steppe ecosystems  , where rainfed agriculture is the dominating source of food and where water constitutes a key limiting factor to crop growth.
Revised:  These countries coincide closely with those located in the semi-arid and dry sub-humid hydroclimates in the world , i.e. savanna and steppe ecosystems ) , where rainfed agriculture is the dominating source of food and where water constitutes a key limiting factor to crop growth.
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Original:  These countries coincide closely with those located in the semi-arid and dry sub-humid hydroclimates in the world , i.e.  savanna and steppe ecosystems  , where rainfed agriculture is the dominating source of food and where water constitutes a key limiting factor to crop growth.
Revised:  These countries coincide closely with those located in the semi-arid and dry sub-humid hydroclimates in the world , i.e. savanna and steppe ecosystems , where rainfed agriculture is the dominant source of food and where water constitutes a key limiting factor to crop growth.
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Original:  However, it concluded that there was much opportunity to raise productivity from rainfed farming.
Revised:  However, it concluded that there was much opportunity to raise the productivity of rainfed farming.
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Original:  The importance of rainfed agriculture varies regionally, but  produces most food for poor communities in developing countries.
Revised:  The importance of rainfed agriculture varies regionally, but it produces most food for poor communities in developing countries.
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Original:  In sub-Saharan Africa  more than 95\% of the farmed land is rainfed, while the corresponding figure for Latin America is almost 90\%, for South Asia about 60\%, for East Asia 65\%  and for the Near East and North Africa 75\%.
Revised:  In sub-Saharan Africa , more than 95\% of the farmed land is rainfed, while the corresponding figure for Latin America is almost 90\%, for South Asia about 60\%, for East Asia 65\% and for the Near East and North Africa 75\%.
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Original:  In sub-Saharan Africa  more than 95\% of the farmed land is rainfed, while the corresponding figure for Latin America is almost 90\%, for South Asia about 60\%, for East Asia 65\%  and for the Near East and North Africa 75\%.
Revised:  In sub-Saharan Africa more than 95\% of the farmed land is rainfed, while the corresponding figure for Latin America is almost 90\%, for South Asia about 60\%, for East Asia 65\% , and for the Near East and North Africa 75\%.
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Original:  Despite large strides made in improving productivity and environmental conditions in many developing countries, a great number of poor families in Africa and Asia still face poverty, hunger, food insecurity  and malnutrition where rainfed agriculture is the main agricultural activity.
Revised:  Despite large strides made in improving productivity and environmental conditions in many developing countries, a great number of poor families in Africa and Asia still face poverty, hunger, food insecurity , and malnutrition where rainfed agriculture is the main agricultural activity.
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Original:  In developing countries  rainfed grain yields are on average 1.5 hectare, compared with 3.1 hectare for irrigated yields, and increase in production from rainfed agriculture has mainly originated from land expansion.
Revised:  In developing countries , rainfed grain yields are on average 1.5 hectare, compared with 3.1 hectare for irrigated yields, and increase in production from rainfed agriculture has mainly originated from land expansion.
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Original: Biography the man with long range dreams(مردی با رویاهای دور برد) Tehrani Moghaddam was born on 29 October 1959 in Tehran.
Revised: Biography Tehrani Moghaddam was born on 29 October 1959 in Tehran.
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Original:  Toosi University of Technology. terror Tehrani Moghaddam's tomb at Behesht Zahra The Bid Kaneh arsenal explosion was a very large explosion that occurred on 12 November 2011 at the missile garrison of Modares.
Revised:  Toosi University of Technology. Death Tehrani Moghaddam's tomb at Behesht Zahra The Bid Kaneh arsenal explosion was a very large explosion that occurred on 12 November 2011 at the missile garrison of Modares.
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Original:  <israel and u.s goverment behinde terror of hassan tehrani moghaddaam
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Original:  His immediate goal was to develop a ballistic missile program with an operational range of more than 2,000 kilometers that could hugely deter Israel.
Revised:  His immediate goal was to develop a ballistic missile program with an operational range of more than 2,000 kilometers that could hugely threaten Israel.
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Original: Life and career  Spooner was born  at 17 Chapel Street, Grosvenor Place, London , SW1 . He was  educated at Oswestry School (where he was a contemporary of Frederick Gustavus Burnaby) and New College, Oxford, where he was the first non-Wykehamist to become an undergraduate.
Revised: Life and career Spooner was born at 17 Chapel Street, Grosvenor Place, London . He was educated at Oswestry School (where he was a contemporary of Frederick Gustavus Burnaby) and New College, Oxford, where he was the first non-Wykehamist to become an undergraduate.
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Original:  In a 1930 interview, Spooner himself admitted to uttering "Kinkering Congs Their Titles Take" Fun-With-Words History (Conquering Kings...) Spooner called this hymn out from the pulpit in 1879.
Revised:  In a 1930 interview, Spooner himself admitted to uttering "Kinkering Congs Their Titles Take" (Conquering Kings...) Spooner called this hymn out from the pulpit in 1879.
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