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Original:  If the trial is successful, the airline would “be looking to roll out the devices across our entire domestic and international network later in the year", said Buchana
Revised:  If the trial is successful, the airline would “be looking to roll out the devices across our entire domestic and international network later in the year", said Buchanan
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Original: Apple iPad (file photo) Jetstar Airways , a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline, has announced plans to trial Apple iPads as an in-flight entertainment option.
Revised:  Jetstar Airways , a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline, has announced plans to trial Apple iPads as an in-flight entertainment option.
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Original: Apple iPad (file photo) Jetstar Airways , a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline, has announced plans to trial Apple iPads as an in-flight entertainment option.
Revised: Apple iPad (file photo) , a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline, has announced plans to trial Apple iPads as an in-flight entertainment option.
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Original: Apple iPad (file photo) Jetstar Airways , a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline, has announced plans to trial Apple iPads as an in-flight entertainment option.
Revised: Apple iPad (file photo) Jetstar Airways , a Qantas owned Australian low-cost airline, has announced plans to trial Apple as an in-flight entertainment option.
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Original:  Starting later this month, Jetstar plans to begin a two-week trial, during which passengers will have the option to rent iPads for $10AU on domestic flights longer than an hour.
Revised:  Starting later this month, Jetstar plans to begin a two-week trial, during which passengers will have the option to rent iPads for 10 on domestic flights longer than an hour.
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Original: Two men were severely hurt in a transformer explosion around 1500h local time at a popular Toronto fairground.
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Original:  The explosion occurred during preparations for the opening of the Canadian National Exhibition (CNE), the largest fair of its kind in Canada.
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Original: In Israël, the conversations started to form a new government.
Revised: In Israel, key political parties have begin conversations to form a new government.
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Original:  The Likud party and the Labour party are going to sooperate to make sure there will come a stable formation.
Revised:  The Likud party and the Labour party intend to cooperate to ensure a stable formation.
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Original:  If these talkings work, Ariël Sharon can start his plan to evacuate Gaza.
Revised:  If the process works as planned, Prime Minister Ariel Sharon can start his plan to evacuate Gaza.
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Original:  Mr  Sharon needed new coalition partners after sacking Shinui from government.
Revised:  Mr . Sharon needed new coalition partners after sacking Shinui from government.
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Original:  International reporters think the agreement between the Likud party and the Labour party was already made, but for the world it has to seem like it is all new.
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Original: category:Need Help In Israel, key political parties have begin conversations to form a new government.
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Original:  Prosecuters say Tobin conspired with state GOP official Charles Mcgee and a consultant in Virginia, both of whom are cooperating with prosecuters, to have the consultant's telephone firm make repeated hang-up calls to Democratic and labor union get-out-the-vote phone banks   .
Revised:  Prosecuters say Tobin conspired with state GOP official Charles Mcgee and a consultant in Virginia, both of whom are cooperating with prosecuters, to have the consultant's telephone firm make repeated hang-up calls to Democratic and labor union get-out-the-vote phone banks . .
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Original:  Prosecuters say Tobin conspired with state GOP official Charles Mcgee and a consultant in Virginia, both of whom are cooperating with prosecuters , to have the consultant's telephone firm make repeated hang-up calls to Democratic and labor union get-out-the-vote phone banks . ] This prevented voters who wanted to request transportation to the polling stations from reaching the Democrats and labor unions and therefore barred them from participation in the elections   .
Revised:  Prosecuters say Tobin conspired with state GOP official Charles Mcgee and a consultant in Virginia, both of whom are cooperating with prosecutors , to have the consultant's telephone firm make repeated hang-up calls to Democratic and labor union get-out-the-vote phone banks . ] This prevented voters who wanted to request transportation to the polling stations from reaching the Democrats and labor unions and therefore barred them from participation in the elections .
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Original:  Prosecuters say Tobin conspired with state GOP official Charles Mcgee and a consultant in Virginia, both of whom are cooperating with prosecuters , to have the consultant's telephone firm make repeated hang-up calls to Democratic and labor union get-out-the-vote phone banks . ] This prevented voters who wanted to request transportation to the polling stations from reaching the Democrats and labor unions and therefore barred them from participation in the elections   .
Revised:  Prosecuters say Tobin conspired with state GOP official Charles Mcgee and a consultant in Virginia, both of whom are cooperating with prosecuters , to have the consultant's telephone firm make repeated hang-up calls to Democratic and labor union get-out-the-vote phone banks . ed] This prevented voters who wanted to request transportation to the polling stations from reaching the Democrats and labor unions and therefore barred them from participation in the elections .
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Original: Recently, Hatoyama has lost popularity after a disagreement regarding a US army base.
Revised: Recently, Hatoyama has lost popularity after a disagreement regarding the US base.
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Original: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down over his broken campaign promise to move a U.S. Marine base off the southern island of  Okinawa.
Revised: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down over his broken campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the southern island of Okinawa.
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Original: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down over his broken campaign promise to move a U.S. Marine base off the southern island of  Okinawa.
Revised: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down over his broken campaign promise to move a U.S. Marine base off the southern island of w: Okinawa.
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Original:   Hatoyama had previously won a landslide election last August.
Revised:  Hatoyama is expected to formally resign before a meeting of party leaders today. Hatoyama had previously won a landslide election last August.
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Original:  He will be the fourth Japanese leader in a row to resign without being in office for a year  
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Original: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after losing popularity over a broken campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the southern island of Okinawa.
Revised: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after a broken campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the southern island of Okinawa.
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Original:  Hatoyama is expected to formally resign before a meeting of party leaders today.
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Original: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after a broken campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the southern island of Okinawa  .
Revised: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after breaking a campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the southern island of Okinawa .
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Original: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after a broken campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the southern island of Okinawa  .
Revised: Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after a broken campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the island of Okinawa .
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Original:  He is expected to formally resign before a meeting of party leaders today.
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Original:  Hatoyama had made a deal Friday with US president Barack Obama retain the Marine base on Okinawa, citing threats to both countries' national security, but the agreement was strongly opposed in Japan.
Revised:  Last week, Hatoyama made a deal Friday with US president Barack Obama retain the Marine base on Okinawa, citing threats to both countries' national security, but the agreement was strongly opposed in Japan.
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Original:  Hatoyama had made a deal Friday with US president Barack Obama retain the Marine base on Okinawa, citing threats to both countries' national security, but the agreement was strongly opposed in Japan.
Revised:  Hatoyama had made a deal with US president Barack Obama retain the Marine base on Okinawa, citing threats to both countries' national security, but the agreement was strongly opposed in Japan.
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Original: Japanese Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama will resign later today, according to reports by Japanese media outlet NHK . Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after breaking a campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the  island of Okinawa Friday .
Revised: Japanese Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama will resign later today, according to reports by Japanese media outlet NHK . Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after a broken campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the island of Okinawa Friday .
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Original: Japanese Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama will resign later today, according to reports by Japanese media outlet NHK . Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after breaking a campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the  island of Okinawa Friday .
Revised: Japanese Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama will resign later today, according to reports by Japanese media outlet NHK . Hatoyama told a news conference broadcast nationwide that he will step down after breaking a campaign promise to move a US Marine base off the island of Okinawa .
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Original:  He formally resigned before a meeting of party leaders today.
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Original:  Last week, Hatoyama made a deal  with US president Barack Obama retain the Marine base on Okinawa, citing threats to both countries' national security, but the agreement was strongly opposed in Japan.
Revised:  Hatoyama had made a deal with US president Barack Obama retain the Marine base on Okinawa, citing threats to both countries' national security, but the agreement was strongly opposed in Japan.
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Original: La nómina oficial de la selección es la siguiente :
Revised: The official list of the football team is the following :
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Original: PonceDefensaUniversidad 
Revised: PonceDefenderUniversidad 
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Original: FuentesDefensaUniversidad CatólicaMauricio IslaDefensaUdineseGonzalo JaraDefensaWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaVolanteRegginaRodrigo TelloVolanteBesiktasArturo VidalVolanteBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaVolanteUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarVolanteColo ColoJorge ValdiviaVolanteAl AinMatías FernándezVolanteSportingMark GonzálezDelanteroCSKAJean BeausejourDelanteroAméricaHumberto SuazoDelanteroZaragozaFabián OrellanaDelanteroXerezEsteban ParedesDelanteroColo ColoAlexis SánchezDelanteroUdinese
Revised: FuentesDefensaUniversidad CatólicaMauricio IslaDefenderUdineseGonzalo JaraDefenderWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaMidfielderRegginaRodrigo TelloMidfielderBesiktasArturo VidalMidfielderBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaMidfielderUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarMidfielderColo ColoJorge ValdiviaMidfielderAl AinMatías FernándezVolanteSportingMark GonzálezDelanteroCSKAJean BeausejourDelanteroAméricaHumberto SuazoDelanteroZaragozaFabián OrellanaDelanteroXerezEsteban ParedesDelanteroColo ColoAlexis SánchezDelanteroUdinese
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Original: FuentesDefensaUniversidad CatólicaMauricio IslaDefensaUdineseGonzalo JaraDefensaWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaVolanteRegginaRodrigo TelloVolanteBesiktasArturo VidalVolanteBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaVolanteUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarVolanteColo ColoJorge ValdiviaVolanteAl AinMatías FernándezVolanteSportingMark GonzálezDelanteroCSKAJean BeausejourDelanteroAméricaHumberto SuazoDelanteroZaragozaFabián OrellanaDelanteroXerezEsteban ParedesDelanteroColo ColoAlexis SánchezDelanteroUdinese
Revised: FuentesDefensaUniversidad CatólicaMauricio IslaDefensaUdineseGonzalo JaraDefensaWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaVolanteRegginaRodrigo TelloVolanteBesiktasArturo VidalVolanteBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaVolanteUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarVolanteColo ColoJorge ValdiviaVolanteAl AinMatías FernándezMidfielderSportingMark GonzálezForwardCSKAJean BeausejourForwardAméricaHumberto SuazoForwardZaragozaFabián OrellanaForwardXerezEsteban ParedesForwardColo ColoAlexis SánchezForwardUdinese
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Original: JaraDefenderWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaMidfielderRegginaRodrigo TelloMidfielderBesiktasArturo VidalMidfielderBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaMidfielderUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarMidfielderColo ColoJorge ValdiviaMidfielderAl AinMatías FernándezMidfielderSportingMark GonzálezForwardCSKAJean BeausejourForwardAméricaHumberto SuazoForwardZaragozaFabián OrellanaForwardXerezEsteban ParedesForwardColo ColoAlexis SánchezForwardUdinese Fuentes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Categoría:
Revised: JaraDefenderWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaMidfielderRegginaRodrigo TelloMidfielderBesiktasArturo VidalMidfielderBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaMidfielderUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarMidfielderColo ColoJorge ValdiviaMidfielderAl AinMatías FernándezMidfielderSportingMark GonzálezForwardCSKAJean BeausejourForwardAméricaHumberto SuazoForwardZaragozaFabián OrellanaForwardXerezEsteban ParedesForwardColo ColoAlexis Fuentes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Categoría:
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Original: JaraDefenderWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaMidfielderRegginaRodrigo TelloMidfielderBesiktasArturo VidalMidfielderBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaMidfielderUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarMidfielderColo ColoJorge ValdiviaMidfielderAl AinMatías FernándezMidfielderSportingMark GonzálezForwardCSKAJean BeausejourForwardAméricaHumberto SuazoForwardZaragozaFabián OrellanaForwardXerezEsteban ParedesForwardColo ColoAlexis SánchezForwardUdinese Fuentes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Categoría:
Revised: JaraDefenderWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaMidfielderRegginaRodrigo TelloMidfielderBesiktasArturo VidalMidfielderBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaMidfielderUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarMidfielderColo ColoJorge ValdiviaMidfielderAl AinMatías FernándezMidfielderSportingMark GonzálezForwardCSKAJean BeausejourForwardAméricaHumberto SuazoForwardZaragozaFabián OrellanaForwardXerezEsteban ParedesForwardColo ColoAlexis SánchezForwardUdinese %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Categoría:
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Original: Chile  national football team has finally discarded the participation of Roberto Cereceda, player of Colo-Colo, in the South African FIFA World Cup  .
Revised: Chile 's national football team has finally discarded the participation of Roberto Cereceda, player of Colo-Colo, in the South African FIFA World Cup .
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Original: Chile  national football team has finally discarded the participation of Roberto Cereceda, player of Colo-Colo, in the South African FIFA World Cup  .
Revised: Chile national football team has finally removed Roberto Cereceda, player of Colo-Colo, in the South African FIFA World Cup .
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Original: Chile  national football team has finally discarded the participation of Roberto Cereceda, player of Colo-Colo, in the South African FIFA World Cup  .
Revised: Chile national football team has finally discarded the participation of Roberto Cereceda, a player from Colo-Colo, in the South African FIFA World Cup .
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Original: Chile  national football team has finally discarded the participation of Roberto Cereceda, player of Colo-Colo, in the South African FIFA World Cup  .
Revised: Chile national football team has finally discarded the participation of Roberto Cereceda, player of Colo-Colo, in the South African FIFA World Cup in South Africa .
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Original:  The official list of  the football team is the following :
Revised:  The official list of players on the football team is the following :
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Original:  The official list of  the football team is the following :
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Original: CatólicaMauricio IslaDefenderUdineseGonzalo JaraDefenderWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaMidfielderRegginaRodrigo TelloMidfielderBesiktasArturo VidalMidfielderBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaMidfielderUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarMidfielderColo ColoJorge ValdiviaMidfielderAl AinMatías FernándezMidfielderSportingMark GonzálezForwardCSKAJean BeausejourForwardAméricaHumberto SuazoForwardZaragozaFabián OrellanaForwardXerezEsteban ParedesForwardColo ColoAlexis SánchezForwardUdines
Revised: CatólicaMauricio IslaDefenderUdineseMarco EstradaDefenderUniversidad de ChileArturo VidalDefenderBayer LeverkusenGonzalo JaraDefenderWest BromwichCarlos CarmonaMidfielderRegginaRodrigo TelloMidfielderBesiktasArturo VidalMidfielderBayer LeverkusenMarco EstradaMidfielderUniversidad de ChileRodrigo MillarMidfielderColo ColoJorge ValdiviaMidfielderAl AinMatías FernándezMidfielderSportingMark GonzálezForwardCSKAJean BeausejourForwardAméricaHumberto SuazoForwardZaragozaFabián OrellanaForwardXerezEsteban ParedesForwardColo ColoAlexis SánchezForwardUdines
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Original:  Some 4,500 attendees include government delegates from 182 governments, representatives from business and industry, environmental organizations and research institutions.
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Original:  There are also two United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change standing committees meetings, the Subsidiary Body for Scientific and Technological Advice and the Subsidiary Body for Implementation .
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Original:  The AWG-LCA is the negotiating group tasked to deliver a new negotiating text which, the Chair of the AWG-LCA group, Margaret Mukahanana-Sangarwe, is preparing for the June negotiating session.
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Original:  COP 16 which will be held in Cancún, Mexico in November.
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Original:   The AWG-LCA is the negotiating group tasked to deliver a new negotiating textwhich, is preparing for the June negotiating session.
Revised:  The AWG-LCA is the negotiating group tasked to deliver a new "negotiative text", ahead of the June negotiating session.
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Original:  COP 16 will be held  in Cancún, Mexico in November . Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by a second one-week intersessional meeting in June , before Cancún.
Revised:  COP 16 will be held in Cancún, Mexico . Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by a second one-week intersessional meeting in June , before Cancún.
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Original:  COP 16 will be held  in Cancún, Mexico in November . Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by a second one-week intersessional meeting in June , before Cancún.
Revised:  COP 16 will be held in Cancún, Mexico in November . Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by one more one-week intersessional meeting in June , before Cancún.
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Original:  COP 16 will be held  in Cancún, Mexico in November . Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by a second one-week intersessional meeting in June , before Cancún.
Revised:  COP 16 will be held in Cancún, Mexico in November . Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by a second one-week intersessional meeting , before Cancún.
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Original: Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by one more one-week intersessional meeting, before Cancún.
Revised: Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by a final one-week intersessional meeting, before Cancún.
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Original: Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by a final one-week intersessional meeting, before Cancún.
Revised: Negotiating under the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change , the next negotiating session will take place in August, followed by another, final one-week intersessional meeting, before Cancún.
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Original:  The battle led to a veritable flood of malicious code that last (sic) weeks."
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Original:  The first of Bird's victims was a fellow taxi driver shot in Whitehaven  with the following victims being chosen at random as Bird drove down the west coast.
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Original:  Members of the public  who saw him were advised not to approach him but to call police .
Revised:  Members of the public who saw him not to approach him but to call police .
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Original:  Members of the public  who saw him were advised not to approach him but to call police .
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Original:  The village of Boot British news network BBC News spoke to several eye-witnesses in relation to the incidents, from each of the areas, including Peter Watson of Whitehaven.
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Original:  There was a man lying on the ground with police stood over him and a jacket on him," he reported  
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