wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  “ It's very important that they seek a breakthrough in this current deadlocked situation ” South Korea's senior official and chairman of the meeting Kim Jong-hoon said.
Revised:  “ It's very important that they seek a breakthrough in this current deadlocked situation " South Korea's senior official and chairman of the meeting Kim Jong-hoon said.
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Original:  “ APEC would like to change this message of crisis into a message of hope.
Revised:  " APEC would like to change this message of crisis into a message of hope.
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Original:  ” “ Bird flu will be one of the most important issues to be discussed because it could harm our people through illness, death and through loss of business and jobs.
Revised:  " “ Bird flu will be one of the most important issues to be discussed because it could harm our people through illness, death and through loss of business and jobs.
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Original:  ” “ Bird flu will be one of the most important issues to be discussed because it could harm our people through illness, death and through loss of business and jobs.
Revised:  ” " Bird flu will be one of the most important issues to be discussed because it could harm our people through illness, death and through loss of business and jobs.
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Original:  ” Choi-Young also said that leaders in Busan this week may suggest ways to end the deadlock in agriculture and to move forward on industrial goods and services.
Revised:  " Choi-Young also said that leaders in Busan this week may suggest ways to end the deadlock in agriculture and to move forward on industrial goods and services.
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Original:  Protesters wearing red headbands caring signs saying “ No Bush visit ” and “ No APEC.
Revised:  Protesters wearing red headbands caring signs saying " No Bush visit ” and “ No APEC.
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Original:  Protesters wearing red headbands caring signs saying “ No Bush visit ” and “ No APEC.
Revised:  Protesters wearing red headbands caring signs saying “ No Bush visit " and " No APEC.
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Original:  ” Demands also included better conditions for temporary workers and better social security for all workers.
Revised:  " Demands also included better conditions for temporary workers and better social security for all workers.
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Original: Although the five year drought is easing in New South Wales, Australia, with 37.8\% of the state drought affected at the end of October 2005 a reduction from 77\% at the end of September, the inland city of Goulburn is still on major water restrictions and its dam is still very low.
Revised: The inland city of Goulburn is still on major water restrictions and its dam is still very low.
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Original: Although the five year drought is easing in New South Wales, Australia, with 37.8\% of the state drought affected at the end of October 2005 a reduction from 77\% at the end of September, the inland city of Goulburn is still on major water restrictions and its dam is still very low.
Revised: Although the five year drought is easing in New South Wales, Australia, with 37.8\% of the state drought affected at the end of October 2005 a reduction from 77\% at the end of September, the inland city of Goulburn is still facing major water restrictions and its dam is still very low.
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Original:  At 31 October 2005, the city's main source of water, Pejar Dam, was 11.1\% fulland the total water supply was at 32\% capacity compared with 36\% the same time last year.
Revised:  At 31 October 2005, the city's dam, the Pejar Dam, was 11.1\% fulland the total water supply was at 32\% capacity compared with 36\% the same time last year.
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Original:  At 31 October 2005, the city's main source of water, Pejar Dam, was 11.1\% fulland the total water supply was at 32\% capacity compared with 36\% the same time last year.
Revised:  At 31 October 2005, the city's main source of water, Pejar Dam, was 11.1\% fulland the total water supply at 32\% capacity compared with 36\% the same time last year.
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Original:  At 31 October 2005, the city's main source of water, Pejar Dam, was 11.1\% fulland the total water supply was at 32\% capacity compared with 36\% the same time last year.
Revised:  At 31 October 2005, the city's main source of water, Pejar Dam, was 11.1\% fulland the total water supply was at 32\% capacity in comparison to 36\% the same time last year.
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Original:  At 31 October 2005, the city's main source of water, Pejar Dam, was 11.1\% fulland the total water supply was at 32\% capacity compared with 36\% the same time last year.
Revised:  At 31 October 2005, the city's main source of water, Pejar Dam, was 11.1\% fulland the total water supply was at 32\% capacity compared with 36\% capacity over the same period last year.
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Original:  Above average rainfalls in September 2005 have delayed some of the harder decisions facing the town in the middle of the year  such as the closing down of industries dependant on water usage.
Revised:  Above average rainfalls in September 2005 have delayed some of the harder decisions facing the town in the middle of the year , such as the closing down of industries dependant on water usage.
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Original: Above average rainfalls in September 2005 have delayed some of the harder decisions facing the town in the middle of the year, such as the closing down of industries dependant on water usage.
Revised: Above average rainfalls in September 2005 have delayed some of the harder decisions facing the town in the middle of the year, such as the closing down of industries dependent on water usage.
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Original: However, chief operating officer of the International Bureau of Aviation, Phil Seymour  believes the memory unit will not be of much use to investigators saying because of the depth it was located at, "If you were to throw a computer into the ocean, imagine how all the parts would eventually split and you have the corrosive effects of seawater and the depths involved."
Revised: However, chief operating officer of the International Bureau of Aviation, Phil Seymour , speaking to , believes the memory unit will not be of much use to investigators saying because of the depth it was located at, "If you were to throw a computer into the ocean, imagine how all the parts would eventually split and you have the corrosive effects of seawater and the depths involved."
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Original:  Officials from France's aviation accident investigation agency, the (BEA)  announced on Tuesday that they had recovered the (CVR) of has been located and brought to  surface by a Remora 6000 unmanned submarine and brought aboard the Île de Sein, one of the vessels taking part in the recovery and salvage efforts.
Revised:  Officials from France's aviation accident investigation agency, the (BEA) , announced on Tuesday that they had recovered the (CVR) of has been located and brought to surface by a Remora 6000 unmanned submarine and brought aboard the Île de Sein, one of the vessels taking part in the recovery and salvage efforts.
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Original:  Officials from France's aviation accident investigation agency, the (BEA)  announced on Tuesday that they had recovered the (CVR) of has been located and brought to  surface by a Remora 6000 unmanned submarine and brought aboard the Île de Sein, one of the vessels taking part in the recovery and salvage efforts.
Revised:  Officials from France's aviation accident investigation agency, the (BEA) announced on Tuesday that they had recovered the (CVR) of . It was located and brought to surface by a Remora 6000 unmanned submarine and brought aboard the Île de Sein, one of the vessels taking part in the recovery and salvage efforts.
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Original:  Officials from France's aviation accident investigation agency, the (BEA)  announced on Tuesday that they had recovered the (CVR) of has been located and brought to  surface by a Remora 6000 unmanned submarine and brought aboard the Île de Sein, one of the vessels taking part in the recovery and salvage efforts.
Revised:  Officials from France's aviation accident investigation agency, the (BEA) announced on Tuesday that they had recovered the (CVR) of has been located and brought to the surface by a Remora 6000 unmanned submarine and brought aboard the Île de Sein, one of the vessels taking part in the recovery and salvage efforts.
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Original:  Officials from France's aviation accident investigation agency, the (BEA)  announced on Tuesday that they had recovered the (CVR) of has been located and brought to  surface by a Remora 6000 unmanned submarine and brought aboard the Île de Sein, one of the vessels taking part in the recovery and salvage efforts.
Revised:  Officials from France's aviation accident investigation agency, the (BEA) announced on Tuesday that they had recovered the (CVR) of has been located and brought to surface by a Remora 6000 unmanned submarine , then taken aboard the Île de Sein, one of the vessels taking part in the recovery and salvage efforts.
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Original: In March, a French judge placed the European aircraft maker  and under investigation for possible involuntary manslaughter charges in the 2009 crash.
Revised: In March, a French judge placed the European aircraft maker Airbus and under investigation for possible involuntary manslaughter charges in the 2009 crash.
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Original: Robertson made headlines this summer when he called on his daily show for the assassination of Venezuelan President Hugo Chavez.
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Original:  He has also said that feminism encourages women to "kill their children, practice witchcraft, destroy capitalism and become lesbians."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Related news External links The 700 Club Official Webpage%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See Robertson's remark
Revised:  He has also said that feminism encourages women to "kill their children, practice witchcraft, destroy capitalism and become lesbians."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links The 700 Club Official Webpage%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See Robertson's remark
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Original:  He has also said that feminism encourages women to "kill their children, practice witchcraft, destroy capitalism and become lesbians."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Related news External links The 700 Club Official Webpage%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See Robertson's remark
Revised:  He has also said that feminism encourages women to "kill their children, practice witchcraft, destroy capitalism and become lesbians."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Related news %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See Robertson's remark
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Original: Related news I fully agree with Robertson statement.
Revised: Related I fully agree with Robertson statement.
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Original:  Kawanda was dismissed after a boat sank on Monday while sailing on the Kasai river left around 100 people missing.
Revised:  Kawanda was dismissed after a boat sank on Monday while sailing on the Kasai River left around 100 people missing.
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Original:  A spokesman for the government released a statement saying that Kawanda had failed to "ensure that regulations related to navigation are respected  ] 
Revised:  A spokesman for the government released a statement saying that Kawanda had failed to "ensure that regulations related to navigation are respected of victims] 
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Original:  We don't have the exact number [of victims] but we think it is probably considerably higher than what has already been reported   
Revised:  We don't have the exact number [of victims] but we think it is probably considerably higher than what has already been reported ." 
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Original:  According to the Red Cross, 40 people died when an overcrowded boat sank on Lake Kivu last wee
Revised:  According to the Red Cross, 40 people died when an overcrowded boat sank on Lake Kivu last week
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Original:  Infomation minister Lambert Mende commented on Ms Kawanda's sacking .
Revised:  Information minister Lambert Mende commented on Ms Kawanda's sacking .
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Original:  He added that the government will be paying for the funeral's of the victims.
Revised:  He added that the government will be paying for the funerals of the victims.
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Original:  On the same river where Monday's accident happened  up to 200 people died last year when a boat capsized.
Revised:  On the same river where Monday's accident happened , up to 200 people died last year when a boat capsized.
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Original: Marie-Laure Kawanda, the transport minister for the Democratic Republic of the Congo  has been sacked by the government after a series of boat accidents in the country.
Revised: Marie-Laure Kawanda, the transport minister for the Democratic Republic of the Congo , has been sacked by the government after a series of boat accidents in the country.
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Original: The BBC reports that "On Wednesday, Ethiopian Prime Minister Meles Zenawi  confirmed that he had moved thousands of extra troops to the north of the country, saying it was to prevent an invasion by Eritrea.
Revised: The BBC reports that Ethiopian Prime Minister Meles Zenawi confirmed that he had moved thousands of extra troops to the north of the country, saying it was to prevent an invasion by Eritrea.
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Original: The BBC reports that "On Wednesday, Ethiopian Prime Minister Meles Zenawi  confirmed that he had moved thousands of extra troops to the north of the country, saying it was to prevent an invasion by Eritrea.
Revised: The BBC reports that "On Wednesday, Ethiopian Prime Minister Meles Zenawi has confirmed that he had moved thousands of extra troops to the north of the country, saying it was to prevent an invasion by Eritrea.
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Original: The BBC reports that "On Wednesday, Ethiopian Prime Minister Meles Zenawi  confirmed that he had moved thousands of extra troops to the north of the country, saying it was to prevent an invasion by Eritrea.
Revised: The BBC reports that "On Wednesday, Ethiopian Prime Minister Meles Zenawi confirmed that he had moved thousands of extra troops to the north of the country, to prevent an invasion by Eritrea.
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Original:  " Instead the stalemate has drawn on for three years.
Revised:  Instead the stalemate has drawn on for three years.
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Original:  One of the modalities of the Agreement ( URL ) was that the decision would be 'final and binding.'
Revised:  One of the modalities of the Agreement was that the decision would be 'final and binding.'
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Original:  On the other hand the Eritrean Government has recently (October 2005) curtailed the movements of the UN peacekeeping mission.
Revised:  On the other hand the Eritrean Government has recently curtailed the movements of the UN peacekeeping mission.
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Original: The prosecutor contends the four officers - PC James-Bowen alongside PCs Nigel Cowley, 33, and Mark Jones, 43, and Detective Constable John Donohue, 36 - "punched and beat [ ...
Revised: The prosecutor contends the four officers - PC James-Bowen alongside PCs Nigel Cowley, 33, and Mark Jones, 43, and Detective Constable John Donohue, 36 - "punched and beat [ 
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Original: The prosecutor contends the four officers - PC James-Bowen alongside PCs Nigel Cowley, 33, and Mark Jones, 43, and Detective Constable John Donohue, 36 - "punched and beat[  Ahmed] on the floor".
Revised: The prosecutor contends the four officers - PC James-Bowen alongside PCs Nigel Cowley, 33, and Mark Jones, 43, and Detective Constable John Donohue, 36 - "punched and beat[ ... Ahmed] on the floor".
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Original:  Woken from sleeping beside his wife at 05:00 a.m. by calls of "police, police", "[d]ressed only in his pyjamas and barefooted, Mr Ahmad raised his arms above his head to indicate that he was not going to fight or to present any sort of danger or threat to the police," claims Laidlaw.
Revised:  Woken from sleeping beside his wife at 05:00 by calls of "police, police", "[d]ressed only in his pyjamas and barefooted, Mr Ahmad raised his arms above his head to indicate that he was not going to fight or to present any sort of danger or threat to the police," claims Laidlaw.
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Original:  He was presented "in a collapsing state" to the who was told Ahmed had been violent and resisted arrest.
Revised:  He was presented in " a collapsing state" to the who was told Ahmed had been violent and resisted arrest.
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Original: The prosecutor contends the four officers - PC James-Bowen alongside PCs Nigel Cowley, 33, and Mark Jones, 43, and Detective Constable John Donohue, 36 - "punched and beat [ ...
Revised: The prosecutor contends the four officers - PC James-Bowen alongside PCs Nigel Cowley, 33, and Mark Jones, 43, and Detective Constable John Donohue, 36 - "punched and [ ...
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Original: The prosecutor contends the four officers - PC James-Bowen alongside PCs Nigel Cowley, 33, and Mark Jones, 43, and Detective Constable John Donohue, 36 - "punched and beat [ ...
Revised: The prosecutor contends the four officers - PC James-Bowen alongside PCs Nigel Cowley, 33, and Mark Jones, 43, and Detective Constable John Donohue, 36 - "punched and beat [ beat
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Original: Ahmed remains in custody facing extradition to the US after he was re-arrested the following year .
Revised: Ahmed remains in custody facing extradition to the US .
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Original: An Amber alert was issued for Borden, with her description stated as: white female  age 14, 5'1", 100lbs., brown hair with blonde highlights.
Revised: An Amber alert was issued for Borden, with her description stated as: white female , age 14, 5'1", 100lbs., brown hair with blonde highlights.
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Original: Michael and Cathryn Borden, a couple, both 50 years old, were found shot to death in Lititz, PA shortly after 8 a. m.
Revised: Michael and Cathryn Borden, a couple, both 50 years old, were found shot to death in Lititz, Pennsylvania shortly after 8 a. m.
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Original: Michael and Cathryn Borden, a couple, both 50 years old, were found shot to death in Lititz, PA shortly after 8 a. m.
Revised: Michael and Cathryn Borden, a couple, both 50 years old, were found shot to death in Lititz, PA shortly after 8 AM.
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Original:  An Amber alert was issued for Borden, with her description stated as: white female, age 14, 5'1", 100lbs. , brown hair with blonde highlights.
Revised:  An Amber alert was issued for Borden, with her description stated as: white female, age 14, 5'1", 100 pounds , brown hair with blonde highlights.
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Original:  She was last seen wearing a black sweat shirt with "Pillar" across the front, blue jeans and black sneakers  
Revised:  She was last seen wearing a black sweat shirt with "Pillar" across the front, blue jeans and black sneakers . 
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Original:  The couple's younger daughter, Kara Beth Borden,  14, was found missing, although her older sister still living at home was safe .
Revised:  The couple's younger daughter, Kara Beth Borden, age 14, was found missing, although her older sister still living at home was safe .
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Original:  The couple's younger daughter, Kara Beth Borden,  14, was found missing, although her older sister still living at home was safe .
Revised:  The couple's younger daughter, Kara Beth Borden, 14, was reported missing. Her older sister found in the home unharmed .
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Original:  Her older sister  found in the home unharmed.
Revised:  Her older sister was found in the home unharmed.
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Original: An Amber alert was issued for Borden, with her description stated as: white female, age 14, 5'1", 100 pounds, brown hair with blonde highlights.
Revised: An Amber alert was issued for Borden, with her description stated as: white female, age 14, 5'1", 100 pounds, brown hair with blond highlights.
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Original: Security cameras used in taxis may start recording conversations between passengers if a proposal put to the Queensland State Government is given the go ahead.
Revised: An Australian taxi Queensland State Government is given the go ahead.
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Original: Security cameras used in taxis may start recording conversations between passengers if a proposal put to the Queensland State Government is given the go ahead.
Revised: Security cameras used in taxis may start recording conversations between passengers if a proposal put to the Queensland State Government 
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Original:  The proposal, submitted to the Transport and Main Roads department, aims to amend state legislation allowing taxi security cameras to record audio as well as video Security cameras were implemented in 2006 under restrictions they record only video as the recording of audio was not permitted under law for privacy reasons.
Revised:  started working on a draft of a protocol to use security cameras to record audio as well as video Security cameras were implemented in 2006 under restrictions they record only video as the recording of audio was not permitted under law for privacy reasons.
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Original:  The proposal, submitted to the Transport and Main Roads department, aims to amend state legislation allowing taxi security cameras to record audio as well as video Security cameras were implemented in 2006 under restrictions they record only video as the recording of audio was not permitted under law for privacy reasons.
Revised:  The proposal, submitted to the Transport and Main Roads department, aims to amend state legislation allowing taxi security cameras to record audio as well as video Security cameras were implemented in 2006 under restrictions they record only video . The recording of audio was not permitted under law for privacy reasons.
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Original:   The proposal submitted that the simultaneous recording of audio and video would “ provide greater certainty with regard to investigations, particularly in situation of conflicting statements ” Stickers fitted at entry points to cabs will be used to notify passengers travelling in taxis that audio and images are being recorded.
Revised:  The proposal submitted that the simultaneous recording of audio and video would “ provide greater certainty with regard to investigations, particularly in situation of conflicting statements ". Stickers fitted at entry points to cabs will be used to notify passengers travelling in taxis that audio and images are being recorded.
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Original:  Conversations will be recorded ” Queensland’s Privacy Commissioner Linda Matthews, who was not consulted about the proposal, expressed a need to reassure the public that the recordings would be used for genuine law enforcement purposes.
Revised:  Conversations will be recorded ” 
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Original:  Anastasia Palaszczuk, Queensland’s Transport Minister told 612 ABC radio this morning thatthe ideas within the proposal would be heavily considered before being implemented.
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Original:  I would be meeting with the Privacy Commissioner, I’d be meeting with the taxi industry, I’d be consulting with members of the public in a much more formal way” However, the government has come under fire from The Liberal National Party ’ s transport spokesman Scott Emerson for reasons of privacy . “ We need to know how these recordings are going to be used.
Revised:  I would be meeting with the Privacy Commissioner, I’d be meeting with the taxi industry, I’d be consulting with members of the public in a much more formal way” The Liberal National Party ’ s transport spokesman Scott Emerson for reasons of privacy . “ We need to know how these recordings are going to be used.
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