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Original: British Airways  announced record losses today for the start of the year , reporting losses of £401bn before tax for the year up to March 31.
Revised: British Airways announced record losses today for the start of the year ending March 31, it reported losses of £401bn before tax for the year up to March 31.
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Original: British Airways  announced record losses today for the start of the year , reporting losses of £401bn before tax for the year up to March 31.
Revised: British Airways announced record losses today for the start of the year , reporting losses of £401bn before tax .
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Original:  The company has been hit badly by recent rising fuel costs and a weak pound.
Revised:  The company has been hit by recent rising fuel costs and a weak pound.
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Original:  British Airways aircraft at London Heathrow Airport Despite the revenues for the company going up by £9bn this year, it has seen an unprecedented fuel bill of £3bn, following the 44.5\% increase in the price of oil last year.
Revised:  British Airways aircraft at London Heathrow Airport Despite the revenues for the company going up by £9bn this year, BA has seen an unprecedented fuel bill of £3bn, following the 44.5\% increase in the price of oil last year.
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Original:  However, part of the struggle seen by BA over the last year could be down to the company's dependancy on the premium travel market.
Revised:  However, part of the struggle seen by BA over the last year could be due to the company's dependancy on the premium travel market.
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Original:  However, part of the struggle seen by BA over the last year could be down to the company's dependancy on the premium travel market.
Revised:  However, part of the struggle seen by BA over the last year could be down to the company's dependency on the premium travel market.
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Original:  The company saw a drop of 13\% in Club and First Class passengers, their top market, and with two new aircraft on the way to operate a Club-only service from London City , the company may struggle to fill the flights
Revised:  The company saw a drop of 13\% in "Club" and "First Class" passengers, its top market. With two new aircraft on the way to operate a Club-only service from London City , the company may struggle to fill the flights
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Original:  The company saw a drop of 13\% in Club and First Class passengers, their top market, and with two new aircraft on the way to operate a Club-only service from London City , the company may struggle to fill the flights
Revised:  The company saw a drop of 13\% in Club and First Class passengers, their top market, and with two new aircraft on the way to operate a Club-only service from London , the company may struggle to fill the flights
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Original:  For the first quarter of the year ending March 31, it reported losses of £ 401bn before tax .
Revised:  For the first quarter of the year ending March 31, the airline reported losses of £ 401bn before tax .
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Original:  The company has been hit by recent rising fuel costs and a weak pound.
Revised:  The company 's finances have suffered from rising fuel costs and a weak pound.
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Original:     Company CEO Willie Walsh announced that employees will be offered the option of taking unpaid leave or working part time to try to ease the financial crisis.
Revised:  Company CEO Willie Walsh announced that employees will be offered the option of taking unpaid leave or working part time in order to ease the financial crisis.
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Original:  In order to set an example, he said that he himself would forego pay in the month of July, describing his move as being "no stunt," also adding that he "saw no signs of recovery anywhere."
Revised:  In order to set an example, he said that he himself would forego pay for the month of July, describing his move as being "no stunt," also adding that he "saw no signs of recovery anywhere."
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Original:  In order to set an example, he said that he himself would forego pay in the month of July, describing his move as being "no stunt," also adding that he "saw no signs of recovery anywhere."
Revised:  In order to set an example, he said that he himself would forego pay in the month of July, describing his move as "no stunt," also adding that he "saw no signs of recovery anywhere."
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Original:  In order to set an example, he said that he himself would forego pay in the month of July, describing his move as being "no stunt," also adding that he "saw no signs of recovery anywhere."
Revised:  In order to set an example, he said that he himself would forego pay in the month of July, describing his move as being "no stunt," and adding that he "saw no signs of recovery anywhere."
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Original:  However, part of the struggle seen by BA over the last year could be due to the company's dependency on the premium travel market.
Revised:  Part of BA's troubles over the last year could be due to the company's dependency on the premium travel market.
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Original:  However, part of the struggle seen by BA over the last year could be due to the company's dependency on the premium travel market.
Revised:  However, part of the struggle seen by BA over the last year could be due to the company's dependence on the premium travel market.
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Original:  The company saw a drop of 13\% in "Club" and "First Class" passengers , its top market .
Revised:  The company saw a drop of 13\% in "Club" and "First Class" passengers .
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Original:  The recent drop in oil prices has led the airline to announce an expected savings of £400 million in fuel by next year.
Revised:  The recent drop in oil prices has led the airline to announce an expected saving of £400 million in fuel by next year.
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Original:  The company saw a drop of 13\% in "Club" and "First Class" passengers.
Revised:  The company saw a drop of 13\% in 'Club' and 'First Class' passengers.
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Original:  For the first quarter of the year ending March 31, the airline reported losses of £401 million before tax, despite revenues which rose  £9 billion over the previous year.
Revised:  For the first quarter of the year ending March 31, the airline reported losses of £401 million before tax, despite revenues which rose to £9 billion over the previous year.
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Original:  In order to set an example, he said that he himself would forego pay for the month of July, describing his move as "no stunt," and adding that he "saw no signs of recovery anywhere."
Revised:  In order to set an example, he said that he himself would forego pay for the month of July, describing his move as "no stunt," and added that he "saw no signs of recovery anywhere."
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Original:  The case was tried in Cairo due to the fact the arrests occured in Egypt and took 27 hearings to reach a conviction.
Revised:  The case was tried in Cairo due to the fact the arrests occurred in Egypt and took 27 hearings to reach a conviction.
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Original:  She had died of stab woundsand a slit throat .
Revised:  Her throat was slit and she had suffered other stab wounds .
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Original:  Mustafa 's lawyer had told reporters that his client was in love with Tamim, but was unable to take her a second wife — a common and legal practise in Egypt — due to objections from his family.
Revised:  Moustafa 's lawyer had told reporters that his client was in love with Tamim, but was unable to take her a second wife — a common and legal practise in Egypt — due to objections from his family.
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Original:  The prosecution alleges he had Tamim killed as "means of taking revenge," without specifying exactly what for  .
Revised:  The prosecution alleges he had Tamim killed as "means of taking revenge," though exactly what for .
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Original:  Mustafa was stripped of parliamentary immunity after his September arrest and has in jail since during his trial.
Revised:  Moustafa was stripped of parliamentary immunity after his September arrest and has in jail since during his trial.
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Original:  He has stood down from his position within the Talaat Mustafa Group and his brother Tarek Talaat Moustafa now heads the company, which was founded by their father Talaat Moustafa.
Revised:  He has stood down from his position within the Talaat Moustafa Group and his brother Tarek Talaat Moustafa now heads the company, which was founded by their father Talaat Moustafa.
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Original:  This will now be reviewed by  nation's top religious authority, the Grand Mufti , on June 25.
Revised:  This will now be reviewed by the nation's top religious authority, the Grand Mufti , on June 25.
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Original:  Mustafa is intending an appeal, with his lawyer describing "a one million percent guarantee" of the conviction being overturned
Revised:  Moustafa is intending to file an appeal, with his lawyer describing "a one million percent guarantee" of the conviction being overturned
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Original:  Mustafa is intending an appeal, with his lawyer describing "a one million percent guarantee" of the conviction being overturned
Revised:  Mustafa is intending an appeal, which his lawyer described as having "a one million percent guarantee" of the conviction being overturned
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Original:  Mustafa is intending an appeal, with his lawyer describing "a one million percent guarantee" of the conviction being overturned
Revised:  Mustafa is intending an appeal, with his lawyer describing "a one million percent guarantee" of getting the conviction overturned
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Original:  The prosecution alleges he had Tamim killed as "means of taking revenge," though exactly what for was  specified.
Revised:  The prosecution alleges he had Tamim killed as "means of taking revenge," though exactly what for was not specified.
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Original: Moustafa was stripped of parliamentary immunity after his September arrest and has  in jail since during his trial.
Revised: Moustafa was stripped of parliamentary immunity after his September arrest and has been in jail since during his trial.
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Original:  Roh Moo-Hyun, 2004Roh , who was facing an investigation in allegation of bribery, fell about 6:30 a.m. Korea Standard Time (9:00 p.m. GMT), after having gone hiking with an aide.
Revised:  Roh Moo-Hyun, 2004 Roh , who was facing an investigation in allegation of bribery, fell about 6:30 a.m. Korea Standard Time (9:00 p.m. GMT), after having gone hiking with an aide.
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Original:  Roh Moo-Hyun, 2004Roh , who was facing an investigation in allegation of bribery, fell about 6:30 a.m. Korea Standard Time (9:00 p.m. GMT), after having gone hiking with an aide.
Revised:  Roh Moo-Hyun, 2004Roh , who was facing an investigation into allegations of bribery, fell about 6:30 a.m. Korea Standard Time (9:00 p.m. GMT), after having gone hiking with an aide.
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Original: Former South Korean President Roh Moo-Hyun died after falling from the side of a mountain near his house in an apparent suicide attempt , the state-run Yonhap News Agency reported early Saturday.
Revised: Former South Korean President Roh Moo-Hyun died after falling from the side of a mountain near his house in an apparent suicide , the state-run Yonhap News Agency reported early Saturday.
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Original:  Roh Moo-Hyun, 2004 Roh, who was facing an investigation into allegations of bribery, fell  about 6:30 a.m. Korea Standard Time (9:00 p.m. GMT), after having gone hiking with an aide.
Revised:  Roh Moo-Hyun, 2004 Roh, who was facing an investigation into allegations of bribery, fell at about 6:30 a.m. Korea Standard Time (9:00 p.m. GMT), after having gone hiking with an aide.
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Original: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passer-by, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
Revised: A passerby pushed a man who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passer-by, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
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Original: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passer-by, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
Revised: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide off a bridge because he was being "selfish" . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passer-by, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
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Original: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passer-by, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
Revised: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
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Original:  Lai initially volunteered his services to police to persuade the man not to jump , but police rejected these .
Revised:  66, initially volunteered his services to police to persuade the man not to jump , but police rejected these .
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Original:  Lai initially volunteered his services to police to persuade the man not to jump , but police rejected these .
Revised:  Lai initially volunteered his services to police to persuade the man not to jump , but police rejected him .
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Original:  The pushed man, Chen Fuchao, survived  with spinal and elbow injuries, because he landed on a partially-inflated air cushion 8 metres (26 feet) below.
Revised:  The pushed man, Chen Fuchao, survived with spinal and elbow injuries, as he landed on a partially-inflated air cushion 8 metres (26 feet) below.
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Original: Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passer-by , Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
Revised: Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby , Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
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Original: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
Revised: A passerby pushed a man who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
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Original: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
Revised: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide off a bridge because he was being "selfish" . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
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Original: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
Revised: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers like Chen are very selfish.
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Original: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers... are very selfish.
Revised: A passerby pushed a man who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers... are very selfish.
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Original: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers... are very selfish.
Revised: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide off a bridge because he was being "selfish" . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers... are very selfish.
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Original: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge The 66-year-old passerby, Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers... are very selfish.
Revised: A passerby pushed a man , who was threatening to commit suicide , off Haizhu Bridge in Guangzhou, China . Haizhu Bridge Lai Jiansheng, told China Daily that "I pushed him off because jumpers... are very selfish.
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Original:  He has said he will challenge the election's outcome in court  
Revised:  He has said he will challenge the election's outcome in court . 
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Original: The fax machine is a part of the automated Radiology Information System.
Revised: The fax machine is part of the automated Radiology Information System.
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Original:  An audit revealed that medical diagnostic tests involve results dating back a decade  have been affected by the broken fax machine.
Revised:  An audit revealed that medical diagnostic tests involve results dating back a decade , have been affected by the broken fax machine.
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Original:  Officials there have a lack of confidence in the physician 's competency who first interpreted the radiology results
Revised:  Officials there doubt the competence of the physician who first interpreted the radiology results
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Original: The German First Bundesliga ended its season today . VfL Wolfsburg claimed its first season title with a win over UEFA Cup runners-up Werder Bremen by 5-1.
Revised: The German First Bundesliga ended its season today . VfL Wolfsburg claimed its first season title with a win over UEFA Cup runners-up Werder Bremen by 5–1.
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Original:  Bayern won 2-1 over Stuttgart, so they join Wolfsburg in the UEFA Champions League 2009-10 group stage, while Stuttgart must start from the play-off round.
Revised:  Bayern won 2–1 over Stuttgart, so they join Wolfsburg in the UEFA Champions League 2009-10 group stage, while Stuttgart must start from the play-off round.
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Original:  Hertha managed to hang on despite being beaten 4-0 by seventeenth-placed Karlsruher SC
Revised:  Hertha managed to hang on despite being beaten 4–0 by seventeenth-placed Karlsruher SC
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Original:  Over the course of the mission’s five spacewalks, the crew added two new science instruments, repaired two others and replaced hardware that will extend the telescope's life at least through 2014 
Revised:  Over the course of the mission’s five spacewalks, the crew added two new science instruments, repaired two others and replaced hardware that will extend the telescope's life at least through 2014. 
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Original: Atlantis had spent just under 13 days in space.
Revised: Atlantis had spent just under thirteen days in space.
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Original:  It will cost NASA US$2 million to transport the shuttle  
Revised:  It will cost NASA US$2 million to transport the shuttle . 
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Original:  This became his fifth win this season   
Revised:  This became his fifth win this season . 
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Original: File:Button Spain 2009.jpg|Jenson Button at the previous Grand Prix ]] Circuit de Monaco Brawn Mercedes driver Jenson Button has won the FIA Formula One 2009 Grand Prix de Monaco on the Circuit de Monaco at Monte Carlo, Monaco.
Revised: File:Button Spain 2009.jpg|Jenson Button at the previous Grand Prix ]] Circuit de Monaco Brawn Mercedes driver Jenson Button won today's FIA Formula One 2009 Grand Prix de Monaco on the Circuit de Monaco at Monte Carlo, Monaco.
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Original:  His teammate Rubens Barrichello was third on the starting grid and was able to overtake  Kimi Räikkönen's Ferrari prior to the first Sainte Devote corner right after the red lights came off.
Revised:  His teammate , Rubens Barrichello, was third on the starting grid and was able to overtake Kimi Räikkönen's Ferrari prior to the first Sainte Devote corner right after the red lights came off.
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Original:  His teammate Rubens Barrichello was third on the starting grid and was able to overtake  Kimi Räikkönen's Ferrari prior to the first Sainte Devote corner right after the red lights came off.
Revised:  His teammate Rubens Barrichello was third on the starting grid and was able to overtake Finn Kimi Räikkönen's Ferrari prior to the first Sainte Devote corner right after the red lights came off.
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Original:  Finn 's third for Ferrari was accompanied by Felipe Massa on the fourth place, the best result for the team so far.
Revised:  Räikkönen 's third for Ferrari was accompanied by Felipe Massa on the fourth place, the best result for the team so far.
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Original:  The last driver not in a lap behind the leader is Giancarlo Fisichella, shown well for Force India.
Revised:  The last driver not in a lap behind the leader was Giancarlo Fisichella, shown well for Force India.
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Original:  The last driver not in a lap behind the leader is Giancarlo Fisichella, shown well for Force India.
Revised:  The last driver not in a lap behind the leader is Giancarlo Fisichella, showing well for Force India.
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Original:  Another winner of this season, Sebastian Vettel, crashed his Red Bull into the wall of tyres on the 15th lap and quitted the race.
Revised:  Another winner of this season, Sebastian Vettel, crashed his Red Bull into the wall of tyres on the 15th lap going out of the race.
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Original:  After the finish of the race , Button forgot to put his car beside the second and third finishers resulting in his run from parc fermé to the main straight where he finally received his trophy from the hands of Prince Albert II.
Revised:  After the finish , Button forgot to put his car beside the second and third finishers resulting in his run from parc fermé to the main straight where he finally received his trophy from the hands of Prince Albert II.
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Original:  Jenson Button strengthen his lead in the Drivers' championship to 51 points with Barrichello 16 and Vettel 28 points behind.
Revised:  Jenson Button strengthened his lead in the Drivers' championship to 51 points with Barrichello 16 and Vettel 28 points behind.
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Original:  This year is an 80 years anniversary of the first Monaco Grand Prix, but this one is only  67th GP on this circuit because some of the years it wasn't held
Revised:  This year is the 80th anniversary of the first Monaco Grand Prix, but this one is only 67th GP on this circuit because some of the years it wasn't held
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