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Original:  Mr Cameron is also holding an hour of talks with the French president at Downing Street , focused on efforts to boost growth in Europe, the military situation in Afghanistan and other foreign policy matters.
Revised:  Mr Cameron held an hour of talks with the French president at Downing Street , focused on efforts to boost growth in Europe, the military situation in Afghanistan and other foreign policy matters.
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Original:  Mr Cameron is also holding an hour of talks with the French president at Downing Street , focused on efforts to boost growth in Europe, the military situation in Afghanistan and other foreign policy matters.
Revised:  Mr Cameron is also holding an hour of talks with the French president at Downing Street primarily focusing on economics, Afghanistan and other foreign policy matters.
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Original:  Nicolas Sarkozy awarded the Legion d'Honneur to six World War II veterans, three of the veterans were British.
Revised:  Nicolas Sarkozy awarded the Legion d'Honneur to six World War II veterans, three of the veterans being British.
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Original: 150px Ronnie Lee Gardner has been executed by Utah firing squads at 0020 local time (0620 BST).
Revised:  Ronnie Lee Gardner has been executed by Utah firing squads at 0020 local time (0620 BST).
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Original: Ronnie Lee Gardner has been executed by Utah firing squads at 0020 local time (0620 BST).
Revised: Ronnie Lee Gardner was executed by firing squad in Utah at 0020 local time (0620 BST).
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Original:  No." Their was then a count-down from 5, with the guns being fired on 2.
Revised:  No." There was then a count-down from 5, with the guns being fired on 2.
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Original:  Ronnie Lee Gardner would not have seen his executers due to bright lights during his final words before a bag was placed over his head.
Revised:  Gardner would not have seen his executers due to bright lights during his final words before a bag was placed over his head.
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Original:  This is the first execution the US has carried out since John Albert Taylor on January 26th, 1996, for raping and then murdering an 11 year old girl.
Revised:  This is the first execution the United States has carried out since John Albert Taylor on January 26th, 1996, for raping and then murdering an 11 year old girl.
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Original:  This is the first execution the US has carried out since John Albert Taylor on January 26th, 1996, for raping and then murdering an 11 year old girl.
Revised:  This is the first execution the US has carried out since John Albert Taylor on January 26th, 1996, for raping and then murdering an eleven year old girl.
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Original:  No." There was then a count-down from 5 , with the guns being fired on 2.
Revised:  No." There was then a count-down from five , with the guns being fired on 2.
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Original:  No." There was then a count-down from 5 , with the guns being fired on 2.
Revised:  No." There was then a count-down from 5 , with the guns being fired on two.
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Original:  Gardner would not have seen his executers due to bright lights during his final words before a bag was placed over his head.
Revised:  Gardner would not have seen his executioners due to bright lights during his final words before a bag was placed over his head.
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Original:  This was during his trial of mudering Melvyn Otterstrom in 1984.
Revised:  This was during his trial of murdering Melvyn Otterstrom in 1984.
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Original:  Police official Colonel Hussein al-Bayati commented that women and children were among the casualties  
Revised:  Police official Colonel Hussein al-Bayati commented that women and children were among the casualties . 
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Original:  Some media reports , however, put the number of dead as high as five.
Revised:  Conflicting media reports put the number of dead as high as five.
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Original: al-Bayati added that the home of Turkmen councillor Niazar Nomaroglu was severely damaged as well, although it wasn't immediately clear whether Nomaroglu had been killed .
Revised: al-Bayati added that the home of Turkmen councillor Niazar Nomaroglu was severely damaged as well, although it wasn't immediately clear whether Nomaroglu had been killed 
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Original: The town of Aughnacloy was in panic after it emerged that there may have been a bomb , left inside a van and parked outside a  police station in the Northern Ireland town . Army experts  have been examining the vehicle which was left at about 10:00pm last night local time.
Revised: left A viable bomb was left inside a van and parked outside a police station in the Northern Ireland town . Army experts have been examining the vehicle which was left at about 10:00pm last night local time.
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Original: The town of Aughnacloy was in panic after it emerged that there may have been a bomb , left inside a van and parked outside a  police station in the Northern Ireland town . Army experts  have been examining the vehicle which was left at about 10:00pm last night local time.
Revised: The town of Aughnacloy was in panic after it emerged that there may have been a bomb , left inside a van parked outside a police station in the Northern Ireland town . Army experts have been examining the vehicle which was left at about 10:00pm last night local time.
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Original:  The caller used a recognised code word and informed the newspaper that the bomb will be detonated in an hour, which triggered an automatic response from police officers.
Revised:  The caller used a recognised codeword and informed the newspaper that the bomb will be detonated in an hour, which triggered an automatic response from police officers.
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Original:  The evacuation was organisedwith little panic, but had to be completed within an hour to ensure that the bomb could be safely disarmed and removed.
Revised:  Democratic Unionist Party councillor Sammy Brush said the evacuation seemed "fairly well organised" and that there was "no panic", but it had to be completed within an hour to ensure that the bomb could be safely disarmed and removed.
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Original:  Sinn Fein, the MP for Fermanagh said the members responsible for this act should "seriously reflect on what they are doing".
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Original:   A car, thought to have been used by the plotters as a get-away car, has been found but was burnt out .
Revised:  Tom Elliott, Ulster Unionist Party MLA for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, described it as "deeply distressing", he said "this was an apparently large and viable device, which was planted with just an hour's warning, is deeply saddening for those who are committed to a peaceful future". Michelle Gildernew, Sinn Fein MP for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, said those responsible for this act should "seriously reflect on what they are doing". A car, thought to have been used by the plotters as a get-away car, has been found but was burnt out .
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Original:   A car, thought to have been used by the plotters as a get-away car, has been found but was burnt out .
Revised:  A car, thought to have been used as a get-away car, has been found but was burnt out .
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Original: The Alert was raised during a telephone call to a newspaper office in Belfast.
Revised: The alert was raised during a telephone call to a newspaper office in Belfast.
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Original:  The Bomb is thought to have been left by Dissident Republicans . Dissidents have been responsible for other similar attacks on official buildings this year.
Revised:  The bomb is thought to have been left by Dissident Republicans . Dissidents have been responsible for other similar attacks on official buildings this year.
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Original:  The Bomb is thought to have been left by Dissident Republicans . Dissidents have been responsible for other similar attacks on official buildings this year.
Revised:  The Bomb is thought to have been left by Dissident Republicans , which have been responsible for other similar attacks on official buildings this year.
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Original:  The bomb was left in the unmarked white Ford Transit van, with the engine left running.
Revised:  The bomb was left in an unmarked white Ford Transit van, with the engine left running.
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Original:  Tom Elliott, Ulster Unionist Party MLA for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, described it as "deeply distressing  " , he said "this was an apparently large and viable device, which was planted with just an hour's warning, is deeply saddening for those who are committed to a peaceful future" and that such incidents were "becoming a familiar feature of life in Northern Ireland once again".
Revised:  Tom Elliott, Ulster Unionist Party MLA for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, described it as "deeply distressing ; " , he said "this was an apparently large and viable device, which was planted with just an hour's warning, is deeply saddening for those who are committed to a peaceful future" and that such incidents were "becoming a familiar feature of life in Northern Ireland once again".
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Original:  Tom Elliott, Ulster Unionist Party MLA for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, described it as "deeply distressing  " , he said "this was an apparently large and viable device, which was planted with just an hour's warning, is deeply saddening for those who are committed to a peaceful future" and that such incidents were "becoming a familiar feature of life in Northern Ireland once again".
Revised:  Tom Elliott, Ulster Unionist Party MLA for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, described it as "deeply distressing " he went on to say that "this was an apparently large and viable device, which was planted with just an hour's warning, is deeply saddening for those who are committed to a peaceful future" and that such incidents were "becoming a familiar feature of life in Northern Ireland once again".
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Original:  A car, thought to have been used as a get-away car, has been found but was burnt out just over the boarder in the Republic of Ireland.
Revised:  A car, thought to have been used as a get-away car, has been found but was burnt out just over the border in the Republic of Ireland.
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Original: left A viable bomb was left inside a van parked outside a local police station in the small village of Aughnacloy, County Tyrone in Northern Ireland.
Revised: left An explosive device was left inside a van parked outside a local police station in the small village of Aughnacloy, County Tyrone in Northern Ireland.
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Original:  The caller used a recognised codeword and informed the newspaper that the bomb will be detonated in an hour, which triggered an automatic response from police officers.
Revised:  The caller used a recognised codeword and informed the newspaper the bomb will be detonated in an hour, which triggered an automatic response from police officers.
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Original:  Democratic Unionist Party councillor Sammy Brush said the evacuation seemed "fairly well organised" and that there was "no panic", but it had to be completed within an hour to ensure that the bomb could be safely disarmed and removed.
Revised:  Democratic Unionist Party councillor Sammy Brush said the evacuation seemed "fairly well organised" and there was "no panic", but it had to be completed within an hour to ensure that the bomb could be safely disarmed and removed.
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Original:  Democratic Unionist Party councillor Sammy Brush said the evacuation seemed "fairly well organised" and that there was "no panic", but it had to be completed within an hour to ensure that the bomb could be safely disarmed and removed.
Revised:  Democratic Unionist Party councillor Sammy Brush said the evacuation seemed "fairly well organised" and that there was "no panic", but it had to be completed within an hour to ensure the bomb could be safely disarmed and removed.
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Original:  The bomb was left in an unmarked white Ford Transit van, with the engine left running.
Revised:  The bomb was left in an unmarked white Ford Transit van, which witnesses reported had the engine left running.
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Original:  Tom Elliott, Ulster Unionist Party MLA for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, described it as "deeply distressing ;
Revised:  Tom Elliott, Ulster Unionist Party MLA for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, described the event as "deeply distressing ;
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Original:  Tom Elliott, Ulster Unionist Party MLA for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, described it as "deeply distressing ;
Revised:  Tom Elliott, Ulster Unionist Party MLA for Fermanagh and South Tyrone, described it as "deeply distressing .
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Original:  " he went on to say that "this was an apparently large and viable device, which was planted with just an hour's warning, is deeply saddening for those who are committed to a peaceful future" and that such incidents were "becoming a familiar feature of life in Northern Ireland once again".
Revised:  " He went on to say that "this was an apparently large and viable device, which was planted with just an hour's warning, is deeply saddening for those who are committed to a peaceful future" and that such incidents were "becoming a familiar feature of life in Northern Ireland once again".
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Original:  A car, thought to have been used as a get-away car , has been found but was burnt out just over the border in the Republic of Ireland.
Revised:  A car, thought to have been used for the get-away car , has been found but was burnt out just over the border in the Republic of Ireland.
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Original:  A car, thought to have been used as a get-away car , has been found but was burnt out just over the border in the Republic of Ireland.
Revised:  A car, thought to have been used as a get-away , has been found but was burnt out just over the border in the Republic of Ireland.
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Original:  A car, thought to have been used as a get-away car , has been found but was burnt out just over the border in the Republic of Ireland.
Revised:  A car, thought to have been used as a get-away car , has been found burnt out just over the border in the Republic of Ireland.
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Original: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that numerous planes coming to Russia's most important Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport for about 4 years have been subjected to the high danger of birdstrike because of large amount of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site, which is illegal.
Revised: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that numerous planes coming to Russia's most important Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport for about four years have been subjected to the high danger of birdstrike because of large amount of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site, which is illegal.
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Original:  He states that for the time of existence of the landfill  there were 141 case of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 such case directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill there were 141 case of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 such case directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
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Original:  He states that for the time of existence of the landfill  there were 141 case of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 such case directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He states that for the time of existence of the landfill , there were 141 case of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 such case directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
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Original:  He states that for the time of existence of the landfill  there were 141 case of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 such case directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He states that for the time of existence of the landfill there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 such case directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
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Original:  He states that for the time of existence of the landfill  there were 141 case of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 such case directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He states that for the time of existence of the landfill there were 141 case of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 of them were directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
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Original:  It has been reported that  for a long time  airport administration and groups of local citizens concerned with the landfill have been appealing to different Moscow Oblast and Russian Federation authorities to address the problem, but it turned out that almost nothing could be done to stop functioning of the landfill due to obscure obstacles in local governing and commerical systems.
Revised:  It has been reported that , for a long time airport administration and groups of local citizens concerned with the landfill have been appealing to different Moscow Oblast and Russian Federation authorities to address the problem, but it turned out that almost nothing could be done to stop functioning of the landfill due to obscure obstacles in local governing and commerical systems.
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Original:  It has been reported that  for a long time  airport administration and groups of local citizens concerned with the landfill have been appealing to different Moscow Oblast and Russian Federation authorities to address the problem, but it turned out that almost nothing could be done to stop functioning of the landfill due to obscure obstacles in local governing and commerical systems.
Revised:  It has been reported that for a long time , airport administration and groups of local citizens concerned with the landfill have been appealing to different Moscow Oblast and Russian Federation authorities to address the problem, but it turned out that almost nothing could be done to stop functioning of the landfill due to obscure obstacles in local governing and commerical systems.
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Original:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, 2010, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo , which historically is the state's main civil airport , to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
Revised:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo , which historically is the state's main civil airport , to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
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Original:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, 2010, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo , which historically is the state's main civil airport , to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
Revised:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, 2010, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo - historically the state's main civil airport , to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
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Original:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, 2010, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo , which historically is the state's main civil airport , to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
Revised:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, 2010, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo , which historically is the state's main civil airport - to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
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Original:  That was made possible only with the interference of Federal Protective Service, the state service which secure top Russian officials
Revised:  That was made possible only with the interference of Federal Protective Service, the state service which protects top Russian officials
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Original:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill, there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and  21 of them were directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill, there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and extra 21 of them were directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill, there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and  21 of them were directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill, there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 instances directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
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Original: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that numerous planes coming to Russia's most important Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport  for about four years have been subjected to the high danger of birdstrike because of large amount of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site,
Revised: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that numerous planes operating near a major Russian airport, the Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport for about four years have been subjected to the high danger of birdstrike because of large amount of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site,
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Original: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that numerous planes coming to Russia's most important Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport  for about four years have been subjected to the high danger of birdstrike because of large amount of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site,
Revised: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that numerous planes coming to Russia's most important Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport , have for about four years have been subjected to the high danger of birdstrike because of large amount of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site,
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Original: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that numerous planes coming to Russia's most important Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport  for about four years have been subjected to the high danger of birdstrike because of large amount of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site,
Revised: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that numerous planes coming to Russia's most important Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport for about four years been at the risk of birdstrikes because of a high number of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site,
Edit intent: clarity