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Original: Four Brazilian paintings were stolen in broad daylight from a branch of the Pinacoteca museum located in Sao Paulo .
Revised: Four Brazilian paintings were stolen in broad daylight from a branch of the Pinacoteca museum located in São Paulo, Brazil .
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Original:  In this, the second high-scale art robbery in Sao Paulo in less then a year, the three armed robbers overpowered three unarmed museum guards, before walking out with the paintings, frame and all, in two large bags.
Revised:  In this, the second high-scale art robbery in São Pauloin less then a year, the three armed robbers overpowered three unarmed museum guards, before walking out with the paintings, frame and all, in two large bags.
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Original:  The paintings were Pablo Picasso's "The Painter and the Model" and his "Minotaur, Drinker and Women", both insured at $4,200, and two paintings by Emiliano Augusto Cavalcanti de Albuquerque Melo (Emiliano Di Cavalcanti), "Women at the Window" insured at $ 500,000 and "Couple" insured at $60,000.
Revised:  The paintings were Pablo Picasso's "The Painter and the Model" and his "Minotaur, Drinker and Women", both insured at $4,200, and two paintings by Emiliano Di Cavalcanti, "Women at the Window" insured at $ 500,000 and "Couple" insured at $60,000.
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Original: Four paintings were stolen in broad daylight from a branch of the Pinacoteca museum located in São Paulo, Brazil.
Revised: Four paintings were stolen in broad daylight from a branch of the Pinacoteca Museum located in São Paulo, Brazil.
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Original:  In this, the second high-scale art robbery in São Pauloin less then a year, the three armed robbers overpowered three unarmed museum guards , before walking out with the paintings, frame and all, in two large bags.
Revised:  In this, the second high-scale art robbery in São Paulo in less then a year, the three armed robbers overpowered three unarmed museum guards , before walking out with the paintings, frame and all, in two large bags.
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Original:  In this, the second high-scale art robbery in São Pauloin less then a year, the three armed robbers overpowered three unarmed museum guards , before walking out with the paintings, frame and all, in two large bags.
Revised:  In this, the second high-scale art robbery in São Pauloin less then a year, the three armed robbers overpowered three unarmed museum guards before walking out with the paintings, frame and all, in two large bags.
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Original:  In this, the second high-scale art robbery in São Pauloin less then a year, the three armed robbers overpowered three unarmed museum guards , before walking out with the paintings, frame and all, in two large bags.
Revised:  In this, the second high-scale art robbery in São Pauloin less then a year, the three armed robbers overpowered three unarmed museum guards , before walking out with the paintings, frames and all, in two large bags.
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Original:  The four paintings were valued between US$568,400 and $612,000.
Revised:  The combined value of the four paintings has been put between US$568,400 and $612,000.
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Original:  The paintings were Pablo Picasso's "The Painter and the Model" and his "Minotaur, Drinker and Women", both insured at $4,200, and two paintings by Emiliano Di Cavalcanti, "Women at the Window" insured at $500,000 and "Couple" insured at $60,000.
Revised:  The paintings were Pablo Picasso's "The Painter and the Model" and "Minotaur, Drinker and Women", both insured at $4,200, and two paintings by Emiliano Di Cavalcanti, "Women at the Window" insured at $500,000 and "Couple" insured at $60,000.
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Original:  This comes just a few months after a December 20th robbery in Sao Paulo , in which another Picasso painting, as well as a painting by Candido Portinari  were stolen after-hours.
Revised:  This comes just several months after a December 20th robbery in Sao Paulo , in which another Picasso painting, as well as a painting by Candido Portinari were stolen after-hours.
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Original:  This comes just a few months after a December 20th robbery in Sao Paulo , in which another Picasso painting, as well as a painting by Candido Portinari  were stolen after-hours.
Revised:  This comes just a few months after a December 20 robbery in Sao Paulo , in which another Picasso painting, as well as a painting by Candido Portinari were stolen after-hours.
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Original:  This comes just a few months after a December 20th robbery in Sao Paulo , in which another Picasso painting, as well as a painting by Candido Portinari  were stolen after-hours.
Revised:  This comes just a few months after a December 20th robbery in Sao Paulo in which another Picasso painting, as well as a painting by Candido Portinari were stolen after-hours.
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Original:  This comes just a few months after a December 20th robbery in Sao Paulo , in which another Picasso painting, as well as a painting by Candido Portinari  were stolen after-hours.
Revised:  This comes just a few months after a December 20th robbery in Sao Paulo , in which another Picasso painting, as well as a painting by Candido Portinari , were stolen after-hours.
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Original: At 1:45 a.m., Jamaluddin Salam, 32, and Salman Abu Samah, 28  tried to escape from the basement lock-up by requesting water.
Revised: At 1:45 a.m., Jamaluddin Salam, 32, and Salman Abu Samah, 28 , tried to escape from the basement lock-up by requesting water.
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Original:  When an officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request,  a breach of procedure ( he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door ), they overpowered him , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officier at the control room to unlock the gates.
Revised:  An officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request, a breach of procedure ( he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door ), they overpowered him , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officier at the control room to unlock the gates.
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Original:  When an officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request,  a breach of procedure ( he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door ), they overpowered him , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officier at the control room to unlock the gates.
Revised:  When an officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request, which is a breach of procedure ( he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door ), they overpowered him , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officier at the control room to unlock the gates.
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Original:  When an officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request,  a breach of procedure ( he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door ), they overpowered him , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officier at the control room to unlock the gates.
Revised:  When an officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request, a breach of procedure ; he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door ), they overpowered him , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officier at the control room to unlock the gates.
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Original:  When an officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request,  a breach of procedure ( he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door ), they overpowered him , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officier at the control room to unlock the gates.
Revised:  When an officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request, a breach of procedure ( he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door . The prisoners took advantage of the open gate and overpowered the officer , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officier at the control room to unlock the gates.
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Original:  When an officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request,  a breach of procedure ( he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door ), they overpowered him , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officier at the control room to unlock the gates.
Revised:  When an officer opened the cell gate to fulfill the request, a breach of procedure ( he should have merely passed water through a hole in the cell door ), they overpowered him , violently punching and kicking him to the ground before heading to the gates at the lock-up's exit, pressing a buzzer to inform the officer at the control room to unlock the gates.
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Original:  He then doubled back to the front and dashed out  the facility.
Revised:  He then doubled back to the front and dashed out of the facility.
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Original:  An officer tripped him with his baton about 100m outside  the facility.
Revised:  An officer tripped him with his baton about 100m outside of the facility.
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Original:  Police revealed yesterday that the Jamaluddin and Salman were not the only inmates in the cell.
Revised:  Police revealed yesterday that Jamaluddin and Salman were not the only inmates in the cell.
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Original:  In their statement, police said they had been upgrading the lock-up area since 2003, adding extra security grilles and enhancing the CCTV system.
Revised:  In a statement, police said they had been upgrading the lock-up area since 2003, adding extra security grilles and enhancing the CCTV system.
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Original:  In their statement, police said they had been upgrading the lock-up area since 2003, adding extra security grilles and enhancing the CCTV system.
Revised:  In their statement, police said they have been upgrading the lock-up area since 2003, adding extra security grilles and enhancing the CCTV system.
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Original:  The following month, a working group was set up to look specifically into the security of the Subordinate Courts lock-up facilities.
Revised:  The following month, a working group was set-up to look specifically into the security of the Subordinate Courts lock-up facilities.
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Original:  The Criminal Investigation Department (CID) is now investigating the circumstances of the attempted escape to see if any officers had been negligent.
Revised:  The Criminal Investigation Department (CID) is now investigating the circumstances of the attempted escape to see if any officers were negligent.
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Original:  Due to the escape attempt, security at the facility has been tightened to prevent the incident from happening again .
Revised:  Due to the escape attempt, security at the facility has been tightened to prevent a similar incident from happening again .
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Original:  Due to the escape attempt, security at the facility has been tightened to prevent the incident from happening again .
Revised:  Due to the escape attempt, security at the facility has been tightened to prevent the incident from happening .
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Original:  New security measures include an extra lock fixed onto the lock-up exit gates , so that another officer will need to check who is leaving the area when it is unlocked.
Revised:  New security measures include an extra lock fixed onto the lock-up exit gates so that another officer will need to check who is leaving the area when it is unlocked.
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Original: Image:Shell tanker truck.jpg|A Shell tanker truck ]] British drivers have been urged not to panic buy fuel because of the 4 day walk out by delivery drivers working for companies delivering to Shell petrol stations.
Revised: Image:Shell tanker truck.jpg|A Shell tanker truck ]] British drivers have been urged not to panic buy fuel because of the 4-day walkout by delivery drivers working for companies delivering to Shell petrol stations.
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Original:  The 600 workers have walked out over pay disagreements, wanting an increase over their current pay of £36,500, however their union Unite turned down a last minute offer of £41,500.
Revised:  The 600 workers have walked out over pay disagreements, wanting an increase to their current pay of £36,500, however their union Unite turned down a last minute offer of £41,500.
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Original:  The 600 workers have walked out over pay disagreements, wanting an increase over their current pay of £36,500, however their union Unite turned down a last minute offer of £41,500.
Revised:  The 600 workers have walked out over pay disagreements, wanting an increase over their current pay of £36,500, however their union Unite turned down a last-minute offer of £41,500.
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Original:  Hoyer UK who employs tanker drivers for Shell  said, "We extended our offer to the very limits that our business could sustain ".
Revised:  Hoyer UK , which employs tanker drivers for Shell said, "We extended our offer to the very limits that our business could sustain ".
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Original:  Hoyer UK who employs tanker drivers for Shell  said, "We extended our offer to the very limits that our business could sustain ".
Revised:  Hoyer UK who employs tanker drivers for Shell , said, "We extended our offer to the very limits that our business could sustain ".
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Original:  Hoyer UK who employs tanker drivers for Shell  said, "We extended our offer to the very limits that our business could sustain ".
Revised:  Hoyer UK who employs tanker drivers for Shell said, "We extended our offer to the very limits that our business could sustain ."
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Original:  However Unite said in a press release that, "this dispute could have been resolved if Shell had advanced a fraction of the billions of pounds in profit they make every month", continuing to say  " One of the world's richest companies is prepared to play Pontius Pilate and see the British public inconvenienced rather than settle this dispute for a sum smaller than the chairman's pay increase last year"
Revised:  However Unite said in a press release that, "this dispute could have been resolved if Shell had advanced a fraction of the billions of pounds in profit they make every month", continuing to say , " One of the world's richest companies is prepared to play Pontius Pilate and see the British public inconvenienced rather than settle this dispute for a sum smaller than the chairman's pay increase last year"
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Original:  However Unite said in a press release that, "this dispute could have been resolved if Shell had advanced a fraction of the billions of pounds in profit they make every month", continuing to say  " One of the world's richest companies is prepared to play Pontius Pilate and see the British public inconvenienced rather than settle this dispute for a sum smaller than the chairman's pay increase last year"
Revised:  However Unite said in a press release that, "this dispute could have been resolved if Shell had advanced a fraction of the billions of pounds in profit they make every month", continuing to say " one of the world's richest companies is prepared to play Pontius Pilate and see the British public inconvenienced rather than settle this dispute for a sum smaller than the chairman's pay increase last year"
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Original:  Shell admitted that the walk out could leave some of it's 1,000 forecourts without fuel, but the UK Petrol Industry Association, who represent oil refiners, said that forecourts would have around 4 days of supply, maintaining usual stocking levels.
Revised:  Shell admitted that the walkout could leave some of it's 1,000 forecourts without fuel, but the UK Petrol Industry Association, who represent oil refiners, said that forecourts would have around 4 days of supply, maintaining usual stocking levels.
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Original:  Shell admitted that the walk out could leave some of it's 1,000 forecourts without fuel, but the UK Petrol Industry Association, who represent oil refiners, said that forecourts would have around 4 days of supply, maintaining usual stocking levels.
Revised:  Shell admitted that the walk out could leave some of its 1,000 forecourts without fuel, but the UK Petrol Industry Association, who represent oil refiners, said that forecourts would have around 4 days of supply, maintaining usual stocking levels.
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Original:  Shell admitted that the walk out could leave some of it's 1,000 forecourts without fuel, but the UK Petrol Industry Association, who represent oil refiners, said that forecourts would have around 4 days of supply, maintaining usual stocking levels.
Revised:  Shell admitted that the walk out could leave some of it's 1,000 forecourts without fuel, but the UK Petrol Industry Association, which represent oil refiners, said that forecourts would have around 4 days of supply, maintaining usual stocking levels.
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Original:  Shell also said that the strike impact would be "significant"  as the company runs around 1 in 10 of all petrol stations in the UK.
Revised:  Shell also commented that the strike impact would be "significant" as the company runs around 1 in 10 of all petrol stations in the UK.
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Original:  Shell also said that the strike impact would be "significant"  as the company runs around 1 in 10 of all petrol stations in the UK.
Revised:  Shell also said that the strike impact would be "significant" , as the company runs around 1 in 10 of all petrol stations in the UK.
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Original:  British Business Secretary, John Hutton, said  "the strike, which will have a disproportionate effect on people in Britain, cannot be justified," and urged both sides to resume negotiations in order to settle the dispute.
Revised:  British Business Secretary, John Hutton, said that "the strike, which will have a disproportionate effect on people in Britain, cannot be justified," and urged both sides to resume negotiations in order to settle the dispute.
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Original:  He also said, "We have been working closely with industry to put in place detailed contingency plans to reduce as far as possible the disruption for the driving public . "  Unite's press release also confirms that " Provision has been made for fire, police and the emergency services."
Revised:  "We have been working closely with industry to put in place detailed contingency plans to reduce as far as possible the disruption for the driving public . " Unite's press release also confirms that " Provision has been made for fire, police and the emergency services."
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Original:  He also said, "We have been working closely with industry to put in place detailed contingency plans to reduce as far as possible the disruption for the driving public . "  Unite's press release also confirms that " Provision has been made for fire, police and the emergency services."
Revised:  He also said, "We have been working closely with industry to put in place detailed contingency plans to reduce as far as possible the disruption for the driving public , " Unite's press release also confirms that " Provision has been made for fire, police and the emergency services."
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Original:  He also said, "We have been working closely with industry to put in place detailed contingency plans to reduce as far as possible the disruption for the driving public . "  Unite's press release also confirms that " Provision has been made for fire, police and the emergency services."
Revised:  He also said, "We have been working closely with industry to put in place detailed contingency plans to reduce as far as possible the disruption for the driving public . " he added. Unite's press release also confirms that " Provision has been made for fire, police and the emergency services."
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Original:  He also said, "We have been working closely with industry to put in place detailed contingency plans to reduce as far as possible the disruption for the driving public . "  Unite's press release also confirms that " Provision has been made for fire, police and the emergency services."
Revised:  He also said, "We have been working closely with industry to put in place detailed contingency plans to reduce as far as possible the disruption for the driving public . " Unite's press release also confirms that " provision has been made for fire, police and the emergency services."
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Original:  Tanker drivers on strike have set up pickets lines at many of Shell's UK refineries including Stanlow, Avonmouth, Plymouth, Pembroke, Cardiff, Kingsbury, Basildon, Grangemouth, Aberdeen, Inverness, Jarrow and Luton Airport
Revised:  Tanker drivers on strike have set up picket lines at many of Shell's UK refineries including Stanlow, Avonmouth, Plymouth, Pembroke, Cardiff, Kingsbury, Basildon, Grangemouth, Aberdeen, Inverness, Jarrow and Luton Airport
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Original:  Tanker drivers on strike have set up pickets lines at many of Shell's UK refineries including Stanlow, Avonmouth, Plymouth, Pembroke, Cardiff, Kingsbury, Basildon, Grangemouth, Aberdeen, Inverness, Jarrow and Luton Airport
Revised:  Tanker drivers on strike have set up pickets lines at many of Shell's UK refineries , including those in Stanlow, Avonmouth, Plymouth, Pembroke, Cardiff, Kingsbury, Basildon, Grangemouth, Aberdeen, Inverness, Jarrow and Luton Airport
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Original: Image:Shell tanker truck.jpg|A Shell tanker truck ]] Despite warnings, some filling stations found their supplies exhausted on Friday evening British drivers have been urged not to panic buy fuel because of the 4-day walkout by delivery drivers working for companies delivering to Shell petrol stations.
Revised: Image:Shell tanker truck.jpg|A Shell tanker truck ]] British drivers have been urged not to panic buy fuel because of the 4-day walkout by delivery drivers working for companies delivering to Shell petrol stations.
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Original: Image:Shell tanker truck.jpg|A Shell tanker truck ]] British drivers have been urged not to panic  buy fuel because of the 4-day walkout by delivery drivers working for companies delivering to Shell petrol stations.
Revised: Image:Shell tanker truck.jpg|A Shell tanker truck ]] British drivers have been urged not to panic to buy fuel because of the 4-day walkout by delivery drivers working for companies delivering to Shell petrol stations.
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Original:  Approximately 106,517 visitors (including 34,685 international buyers) visited this trade sho &  
Revised:  Approximately 106,517 visitors (including 34,685 international buyers) visited this trade show. & 
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Original:    &   2008 COMPUTEX Taipei, famed as the 2nd-largest ICT trade fair, recently closed on June7 at Taipei World Trade Center Exhibition Hall 1  3  and TWTC Nangang.
Revised:  & As the 2008 COMPUTEX Taipei, famed as the 2nd-largest ICT trade fair, recently closed on June7 at Taipei World Trade Center Exhibition Hall 1 3 and TWTC Nangang.
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Original:    &   2008 COMPUTEX Taipei, famed as the 2nd-largest ICT trade fair, recently closed on June7 at Taipei World Trade Center Exhibition Hall 1  3  and TWTC Nangang.
Revised:  & 2008 COMPUTEX Taipei, famed as the 2nd-largest ICT trade fair, recently closed on June7 at Taipei World Trade Center Hall 1 3 and TWTC Nangang.
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