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Original: A man in the United Kingdom named Ronald West, has been convicted of animal neglect after authorities received a complaints about his five-year-old dog being severely overweight.
Revised: A man in the United Kingdom named Ronald West, has been convicted of animal neglect after authorities received complaints about his five-year-old dog being severely overweight.
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Original:  Authorities discovered the case of neglect in December 2008 when a neighbor complained that his Border Collie Taz appeared to be too fat.
Revised:  Authorities discovered the case of neglect in December 2008 after a neighbor complained that his Border Collie Taz appeared to be too fat.
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Original:  Authorities discovered the case of neglect in December 2008 when a neighbor complained that his Border Collie Taz appeared to be too fat.
Revised:  Authorities discovered the case of neglect in December 2008 when a neighbor complained that West's Border Collie Taz appeared to be too fat.
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Original:  When authorities arrived to West's residence, they found Taz's feces scattered around the house and in every room.
Revised:  When authorities arrived at West's residence, they found Taz's feces scattered around the house and in every room.
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Original:  They had found no improvements in living conditions and seized the dog.
Revised:  They had found no improvements in living conditions , and so they seized the dog.
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Original:   West had said  he had been ill with the flu and was unable to clean up after Taz or take him for walks.
Revised:  West had said that he had been ill with the flu and was unable to clean up after Taz or take him for walks.
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Original:  When sentenced, West could face a fine of up to £5,000 (US$7,581), six months in prison, and may be forbidden from owning any pets  
Revised:  When sentenced, West could face a fine of up to £5,000 (US$7,581), six months in prison, and may be forbidden from owning any pets . 
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Original:  Currently, the officials are searching for people the man came into contact with
Revised:  Currently, the officials are searching for people the man may have come into contact with
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Original: "It looks like 13 years of hard work on Toms part could have been wiped out.
Revised: "It looks like 13 years of hard work on Tom's part could have been wiped out.
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Original:  The popular website covered many aspects of computer flight simulation, although it was mainly devoted to Flight Simulator X.
Revised:  The website was used for all types of computer flight simulation, although it was mainly devoted to Flight Simulator X.
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Original:  The popular website covered many aspects of computer flight simulation, although it was mainly devoted to Flight Simulator X.
Revised:  The popular website covered many aspects of computer flight simulation, but it was mainly devoted to Flight Simulator X.
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Original:  The site was launched thirteen years ago, in 1996.
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Original: The United States automobile manufacturer Chrysler LLC has said that it wants to eliminate 789, or about a quarter, of its 3,200 dealers by early June.
Revised: American automobile manufacturer Chrysler LLC has said that it wants to eliminate 789, or about a quarter, of its 3,200 dealers by early June.
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Original:  The Planck telescope is a survey telescope using w:cosmic microwave background radiation| Cosmic Microwave Background (CMB) measurements of the microwave portion of the electromagnetic spectrum.
Revised:  The Planck telescope is a survey telescope using Cosmic Microwave Background (CMB) measurements of the microwave portion of the electromagnetic spectrum.
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Original:  The two telescopes valued at €1.9 billion (£1.7bn) were launched Thursday from Kourou, French Guiana, a department of France in South America.
Revised:  The two telescopes valued at €1.9 billion (£1.7bn) were launched from Kourou, French Guiana, a department of France in South America.
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Original:  Herschel is the largest telescope we have ever put into space and the instruments on Planck will operate at just a tenth of a degree above absolute zero," said Lord Drayson, the United Kingdom  science minister, "This is really cool science happening at mind-blowingly low temperatures, helping to answer some of the basic questions about the history of the universe."
Revised:  Herschel is the largest telescope we have ever put into space and the instruments on Planck will operate at just a tenth of a degree above absolute zero," said Lord Drayson, the United Kingdom 's science minister, "This is really cool science happening at mind-blowingly low temperatures, helping to answer some of the basic questions about the history of the universe."
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Original: The largest [ [[  space telescope is named after William Herschel who discovered the planet Uranus in 1781.
Revised: The largest "It[ [[ space telescope is named after William Herschel who discovered the planet Uranus in 1781.
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Original:  Herschel was released 26 minutes after launch to continue on its trajectory.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "It Planck%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% will allow us to pin down all the basic characteristics of the Universe with very high accuracy - its age, its contents, how it evolved, its geometry, etc." said Dr Jan Tauber, project scientist at ESA.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Planck%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% will allow us to pin down all the basic characteristics of the Universe with very high accuracy - its age, its contents, how it evolved, its geometry, etc." said Dr Jan Tauber, project scientist at ESA.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "It Planck%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% will allow us to pin down all the basic characteristics of the Universe with very high accuracy - its age, its contents, how it evolved, its geometry, etc." said Dr Jan Tauber, project scientist at ESA.
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Original:  Image:Ariane42P rocket.gif|File photo of Ariane (rocket) launched from the Guiana Space Centre on 10 August 1992.
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Original:  GM said the dealerships that were to be closed are "underperforming and very small sales volume U.S. dealers ... will be advised that GM does not see them as part of its dealer network on a long-term basis ."
Revised:  GM said the dealerships that were to be closed are "underperforming and very small sales volume U.S. dealers will be advised that GM does not see them as part of its dealer network on a long-term basis ."
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Original:  GM said the dealerships that were to be closed are "underperforming and very small sales volume U.S. dealers ... will be advised that GM does not see them as part of its dealer network on a long-term basis ."
Revised:  GM said the dealerships that were to be closed are "underperforming and very small sales volume U.S. dealers ... ."
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Original:  The funds will be given to more than one million internally displaced persons (IPD) in Pakistan who have been forced to flee from their homes following heavy violence between Taleban militants and the Pakistani army in Pakistan's NWFP pakistan . Zardari stressed that Pakistan and its neighbours needed to cooperate against the Taleban and other terrorist threats, saying that  "it is a war against a mindset and there is no time limit for the offensive"
Revised:  The funds will be given to more than one million internally displaced persons (IPD) in Pakistan who have been forced to flee from their homes following heavy violence between Taliban militants and the Pakistani army in Pakistan's NWFP pakistan . Zardari stressed that Pakistan and its neighbours needed to cooperate against the Taleban and other terrorist threats, saying that "it is a war against a mindset and there is no time limit for the offensive"
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Original:  The funds will be given to more than one million internally displaced persons (IPD) in Pakistan who have been forced to flee from their homes following heavy violence between Taleban militants and the Pakistani army in Pakistan's NWFP pakistan . Zardari stressed that Pakistan and its neighbours needed to cooperate against the Taleban and other terrorist threats, saying that  "it is a war against a mindset and there is no time limit for the offensive"
Revised:  The funds will be given to more than one million internally displaced persons (IPD) in Pakistan who have been forced to flee from their homes following heavy violence between Taleban militants and the Pakistani army in Pakistan's North West Frontier Province . Zardari stressed that Pakistan and its neighbours needed to cooperate against the Taleban and other terrorist threats, saying that "it is a war against a mindset and there is no time limit for the offensive"
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Original:  The funds will be given to more than one million internally displaced persons (IPD) in Pakistan who have been forced to flee from their homes following heavy violence between Taleban militants and the Pakistani army in Pakistan's NWFP pakistan . Zardari stressed that Pakistan and its neighbours needed to cooperate against the Taleban and other terrorist threats, saying that  "it is a war against a mindset and there is no time limit for the offensive"
Revised:  The funds will be given to more than one million internally displaced persons (IPD) in Pakistan who have been forced to flee from their homes following heavy violence between Taleban militants and the Pakistani army in Pakistan's NWFP pakistan . Zardari stressed that Pakistan and its neighbours needed to cooperate against the Taliban and other terrorist threats, saying that "it is a war against a mindset and there is no time limit for the offensive"
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Original:  The funds will be given to more than one million internally displaced persons (IPD) in Pakistan who have been forced to flee from their homes following heavy violence between Taleban militants and the Pakistani army in Pakistan's NWFP pakistan . Zardari stressed that Pakistan and its neighbours needed to cooperate against the Taleban and other terrorist threats, saying that  "it is a war against a mindset and there is no time limit for the offensive"
Revised:  The funds will be given to more than one million internally displaced persons (IPD) in Pakistan who have been forced to flee from their homes following heavy violence between Taleban militants and the Pakistani army in Pakistan's NWFP pakistan . Zardari stressed that Pakistan and its neighbours needed to cooperate against the Taleban and other terrorist threats, saying that , "it is a war against a mindset and there is no time limit for the offensive"
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Original: The   United Nations says that a further fifty thousand are estimated to still remain in the no-fire zone.
Revised: The The United Nations says that a further fifty thousand are estimated to still remain in the no-fire zone.
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Original: Mahinda Rajapaksa , the president of Sri Lanka, pledged to end the decades-old war against the Tamil Tiger insurgents within two days.
Revised:  , the president of Sri Lanka, pledged to end the decades-old war against the Tamil Tiger insurgents within two days.
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Original: Mahinda Rajapaksa , the president of Sri Lanka, pledged to end the decades-old war against the Tamil Tiger insurgents within two days.
Revised: Mahinda Rajapaksa , the president of Sri Lanka, pledged to end the against the insurgents within two days.
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Original:  File:Mahinda Rajapakse.jpg|upMahinda Rajapaksa, the president of Sri Lanka "President Mahinda Rajapaksa has vowed that within the next 48 hours, thousands of Tamil civilians will be freed from the clutches of the Tamil Tigers," a spokesman for the government said.
Revised:  "President Mahinda Rajapaksa has vowed that within the next 48 hours, thousands of Tamil civilians will be freed from the clutches of the Tamil Tigers," a spokesman for the government said.
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Original:  Sri Lankan armies are largely supported by both India and USA , in a strategic calculus aiming to erase Tamil tiger resistances, who claim communist background.
Revised:  Sri Lankan armies are largely supported by both and , in a strategic calculus aiming to erase Tamil tiger resistances, who claim communist background.
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Original:  An opinion piece in El Mundo called for more resignations at RTVE as they drew parallels in terms of incompetence between the Eurovision event and the Copa del Rey event  }] 
Revised:  An opinion piece in El Mundo called for more resignations at RTVE as they drew parallels in terms of incompetence between the Eurovision event and the Copa del Rey event . }] 
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Original: A judge in Minneapolis  ruled that a boy, Daniel Hauser, has been medically neglected by his parents and must take chemotherapy and radiation therapy for his cancer against his will.
Revised: A judge in Minneapolis , Minnesota, United States ruled that a boy, Daniel Hauser, has been medically neglected by his parents and must take chemotherapy and radiation therapy for his cancer against his will.
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Original:  Stage II Hodgkin lymphoma The judge declared that the ruling was because there was a "compelling state interest in the life and welfare of Daniel sufficient to override the fundamental constitutional rights of both the parents and Daniel to the free exercise of religion and the due process right of the parents to direct the religious and other upbringing of their child."
Revised:  The judge declared that the ruling was because there was a "compelling state interest in the life and welfare of Daniel sufficient to override the fundamental constitutional rights of both the parents and Daniel to the free exercise of religion and the due process right of the parents to direct the religious and other upbringing of their child."
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Original: A vital piece of evidence was presented by a Thomas Sinas, an attorney for the boy's court appointed guardian who doubted Daniel's religous beliefs.
Revised: A vital piece of evidence was presented by a Thomas Sinas, an attorney for the boy's court appointed guardian who doubted Daniel's religious beliefs.
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Original: Previously , 90,000 contraband cigarettes were seized from Lithuanian travellers at the Dublin Ireland airport on Wednesday .
Revised: On Wednesday , 90,000 contraband cigarettes were seized from Lithuanian travellers at the Dublin Ireland airport on Wednesday .
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Original: Previously , 90,000 contraband cigarettes were seized from Lithuanian travellers at the Dublin Ireland airport on Wednesday .
Revised: Previously , 90,000 contraband cigarettes were seized from Lithuanian travellers at the Dublin Ireland airport .
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Original:  This time police recovered 160,000 smokes .
Revised:  This time police recovered 160,000 cigarettes .
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Original: “ Discount brands of cigarettes ... come from countries such as, not only the United States, but India, Native American tribes, the Philippines, Colombia, Mexico and other countries around the globe ”, said a representative from the American State Auditor’s Office.
Revised: " Discount brands of cigarettes ... come from countries such as, not only the United States, but India, Native American tribes, the Philippines, Colombia, Mexico and other countries around the globe ”, said a representative from the American State Auditor’s Office.
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Original: “ Discount brands of cigarettes ... come from countries such as, not only the United States, but India, Native American tribes, the Philippines, Colombia, Mexico and other countries around the globe ”, said a representative from the American State Auditor’s Office.
Revised: “ Discount brands of cigarettes ... come from countries such as, not only the United States, but India, Native American tribes, the Philippines, Colombia, Mexico and other countries around the globe ," said a representative from the American State Auditor’s Office.
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Original: Bootleggers, nicknamed the $5 man, are the new entrepreneurs when taxed cigarettes sell for over US$10 a case.
Revised: Bootleggers, nicknamed the $5 man, are the new entrepreneurs when taxed cigarettes sell for over US$10 a 
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Original:  With two games remaining for both second-place Liverpool and third-place Chelsea, both the second and third places are open, while Arsenal has locked up the fourth place stop . first time at home to clinch title in ten year
Revised:  With two games remaining for both Liverpool and third-place Chelsea, both the second and third places are open, while Arsenal has locked up the fourth place stop . first time at home to clinch title in ten year
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Original:  With two games remaining for both second-place Liverpool and third-place Chelsea, both the second and third places are open, while Arsenal has locked up the fourth place stop . first time at home to clinch title in ten year
Revised:  With two games remaining for both second-place Liverpool and third-place Chelsea, both the second and third places are open, while Arsenal has locked up the fourth place spot . first time at home to clinch title in ten year
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Original: Police reports say that a car bomb has detonated in the Pakistani province of Peshawar on Saturday, killing at least eleven people and injuring a further thirty .
Revised: Police reports say that a car bomb has detonated in the Pakistani province of Peshawar on Saturday, killing at least 11 people and injuring a further thirty .
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Original: Police reports say that a car bomb has detonated in the Pakistani province of Peshawar on Saturday, killing at least eleven people and injuring a further thirty .
Revised: Police reports say that a car bomb has detonated in the Pakistani province of Peshawar on Saturday, killing at least eleven people and injuring at least 30 others .
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Original:  "The condition of two people among the 31 injured is serious."
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Original:  According to local opinion polls taken on Saturday, the Democrats may have an edge over Prime Minister Taro Aso's conservative Liberal Democratic Party ( LDBP ), which has remained in power for five decades.
Revised:  According to local opinion polls taken on Saturday, the Democrats may have an edge over Prime Minister Taro Aso's conservative Liberal Democratic Party ( LDP ), which has remained in power for five decades.
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Original: Yukio Hatoyama Japan's opposition party, the Democratic Party,  chose Yukio Hatoyama as its leader of elections later this year on Saturday .
Revised: Yukio Hatoyama Japan's opposition party, the Democratic Party, chose Yukio Hatoyama as its leader for elections later this year on Saturday .
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Original: Yukio Hatoyama Japan's opposition party, the Democratic Party,  chose Yukio Hatoyama as its leader of elections later this year on Saturday .
Revised: Yukio Hatoyama Japan's opposition party, the Democratic Party, chose Yukio Hatoyama as its leader of elections later this year .
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Original:  The general elections are expected  be held in October.
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Original:  He has also pledged to increase domestic demand during the ongoing recession , the worst in sixty years.
Revised:  He has also pledged to increase domestic demand during the , the worst in sixty years.
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Original:  According to local opinion polls taken on Saturday, the Democrats may have an edge over Prime Minister Taro Aso's conservative Liberal Democratic Party (LDP), which has remained in power for five decades.
Revised:  According to local opinion polls taken on Saturday, the Democrats may have an edge over Prime Minister Taro Aso's conservative (LDP), which has remained in power for five decades.
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Original: Manmohan Singh, the prime minister of India India's Congress party won a large victory in Saturday's w:Indian general election, 2009| general elections.
Revised: Manmohan Singh, the prime minister of India India's Congress party won a large victory in Saturday's general elections.
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Original:  According to state television, the alliance of Congress is ahead or has already won  263 seats.
Revised:  According to state television, the alliance of Congress is ahead or has already won in 263 seats.
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Original: Manmohan Singh, the prime minister of India India's Congress party won a large victory in Saturday's general elections.
Revised: Manmohan Singh, the prime minister of India India's Congress Party won a large victory in Saturday's general elections.
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Original:  Anywhere from 30,000 to 80,000 people are estimated to remain in the war zone  
Revised:  Anywhere from 30,000 to 80,000 people are estimated to remain in the war zone . 
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Original: File:Mahinda Rajapakse.jpg|upMahinda Rajapaksa, the president of Sri Lanka Sri Lankan president Mahinda Rajapakse declared victory over the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) rebels on Saturday, after a civil war lasting 26 years.
Revised:  Sri Lankan president Mahinda Rajapakse declared victory over the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) rebels on Saturday, after a civil war lasting 26 years.
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Original: File:Mahinda Rajapakse.jpg|upMahinda Rajapaksa, the president of Sri Lanka Sri Lankan president Mahinda Rajapakse declared victory over the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) rebels on Saturday, after a civil war lasting 26 years.
Revised: File:Mahinda Rajapakse.jpg|upMahinda Rajapaksa, the president of Sri Lanka Sri Lankan president declared victory over the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) rebels on Saturday, after a civil war lasting 26 years.
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Original: File:Mahinda Rajapakse.jpg|upMahinda Rajapaksa, the president of Sri Lanka Sri Lankan president Mahinda Rajapakse declared victory over the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) rebels on Saturday, after a civil war lasting 26 years.
Revised: File:Mahinda Rajapakse.jpg|upMahinda Rajapaksa, the president of Sri Lanka Sri Lankan president Mahinda Rajapakse declared victory over the (LTTE) rebels on Saturday, after a civil war lasting 26 years.
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Original: File:Mahinda Rajapakse.jpg|upMahinda Rajapaksa, the president of Sri Lanka Sri Lankan president Mahinda Rajapakse declared victory over the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) rebels on Saturday, after a civil war lasting 26 years.
Revised: File:Mahinda Rajapakse.jpg|upMahinda Rajapaksa, the president of Sri Lanka Sri Lankan president Mahinda Rajapakse declared victory over the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) rebels on Saturday, after a lasting 26 years.
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Original:  "My government's precise and well coordinated humanitarian operation has so far succeeded in rescuing over 210,000 civilians who were being used as human shields by the LTTE.
Revised:  "My government's precise and well coordinated humanitarian operation has so far succeeded in rescuing over 210,000 civilians who were being used as by the LTTE.
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Original:  According to defence officials, Sri Lankan military forces have locked down the entire northeastern coast of Mullaithivu , where the Tigers are located, and have surrounded them in a small jungle.
Revised:  According to defence officials, Sri Lankan military forces have locked down the entire northeastern coast of , where the Tigers are located, and have surrounded them in a small jungle.
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