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Original: No-one on the ground was injured by the Illyushin Il-76, which lost control after it failed to gain altitude, banking hard to the right before hitting the ground two kilometers away near a disused mine.
Revised: No-one on the ground was injured by the Ilyushin Il-76, which lost control after it failed to gain altitude, banking hard to the right before hitting the ground two kilometers away near a disused mine.
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Original:  Russia birefly grounded Il-76s after that accident
Revised:  Russia briefly grounded Il-76s after that accident
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Original:  The collision, attributed to strong winds, occured in Jiangxi Province, where the stricken ship was registered.
Revised:  The collision, attributed to strong winds, occurred in Jiangxi Province, where the stricken ship was registered.
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Original:  Anton Turner was helping with the filming of Serious Explorers for CBBC, a children’s branch of the BBC  when the incident happened on Friday .
Revised:  Anton Turner was helping with the filming of Serious Explorers for CBBC, a children’s branch of the BBC , when the incident happened on Friday .
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Original:  Anton Turner was helping with the filming of Serious Explorers for CBBC, a children’s branch of the BBC  when the incident happened on Friday .
Revised:  Anton Turner was helping with the filming of Serious Explorers for CBBC, a children’s branch of the BBC when the incident happened .
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Original:  A spokeswoman for the BBC released a statement saying  " We would like to extend our deepest sympathy to Anton's family and friends.
Revised:  A spokeswoman for the BBC released a statement saying that " We would like to extend our deepest sympathy to Anton's family and friends.
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Original:  A spokeswoman for the BBC released a statement saying  " We would like to extend our deepest sympathy to Anton's family and friends.
Revised:  A spokeswoman for the BBC released a statement saying " we would like to extend our deepest sympathy to Anton's family and friends.
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Original:  Anton was an extremely experienced expedition safari and wildlife ranger and former Army officer who had worked with the BBC in the past ”.
Revised:  Anton was an extremely experienced expedition safari and wildlife ranger and former Army officer who had worked with the BBC in the past ."
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Original: United States Secretary of State Hillary Clinton told Palestinian negotiators today that they should resume talks with Israelis without the preconditions that Israel stop all settlement building in occupied territory . Mrs. Clinton's statement comes after Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas told Israeli negotiators that all negotiations would be postponed until Israel stopped building settlement houses in Palestinian territory.
Revised: United States Secretary of State Hillary Clinton told Palestinian negotiators today that they should resume talks with Israeli negotiators without the preconditions that Israel stop all settlement building in occupied territory . Mrs. Clinton's statement comes after Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas told Israeli negotiators that all negotiations would be postponed until Israel stopped building settlement houses in Palestinian territory.
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Original: United States Secretary of State Hillary Clinton told Palestinian negotiators today that they should resume talks with Israelis without the preconditions that Israel stop all settlement building in occupied territory . Mrs. Clinton's statement comes after Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas told Israeli negotiators that all negotiations would be postponed until Israel stopped building settlement houses in Palestinian territory.
Revised: United States Secretary of State Hillary Clinton told Palestinian negotiators today that they should resume talks with Israelis without the preconditions that Israel stop all settlement building in the occupied territories . Mrs. Clinton's statement comes after Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas told Israeli negotiators that all negotiations would be postponed until Israel stopped building settlement houses in Palestinian territory.
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Original: United States Secretary of State Hillary Clinton told Palestinian negotiators today that they should resume talks with Israelis without the preconditions that Israel stop all settlement building in occupied territory . Mrs. Clinton's statement comes after Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas told Israeli negotiators that all negotiations would be postponed until Israel stopped building settlement houses in Palestinian territory.
Revised: United States Secretary of State Hillary Clinton told Palestinian negotiators today that they should resume talks with Israelis without the preconditions that Israel stop all settlement building in occupied territory . Mrs. Clinton's statement came after Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas told Israeli negotiators that all negotiations would be postponed until Israel stopped building settlement houses in Palestinian territory.
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Original:   "The negotiations are in a state of paralysis, and the result of Israel's intransigence and America's back-pedaling is that there is no hope of negotiations on the horizon , " Nabil Abu Rdainah, a spokesman for Mahmoud Abbas, the Palestinian president, said.
Revised:  "The negotiations are in a state of paralysis, and the result of Israel's intransigence and America's back-pedaling is that there is no hope of negotiations on the horizon . " Nabil Abu Rdainah, a spokesman for Mahmoud Abbas, the Palestinian president, said.
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Original:   "The negotiations are in a state of paralysis, and the result of Israel's intransigence and America's back-pedaling is that there is no hope of negotiations on the horizon , " Nabil Abu Rdainah, a spokesman for Mahmoud Abbas, the Palestinian president, said.
Revised:  "The negotiations are in a state of paralysis, and the result of Israel's intransigence and America's back-pedaling is that there is no hope of negotiations on the horizon , " 
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Original:  The concessions Mrs. Clinton referred to were part of an earlier offer by Israel negotiators that would have stopped some settlement building in the West Bank and would have made no deal concerning  hotly contested East Jerusalem.
Revised:  The concessions Mrs. Clinton referred to were part of an earlier offer by Israel negotiators that would have stopped some settlement building in the West Bank and would have made no deal concerning the hotly contested East Jerusalem.
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Original:  Akiva Eldar of Israel's Ha'aretz newspaper complained , " The message from Obama was change.
Revised:  Avika Eldar of Israel's Ha'aretz newspaper complained , " The message from Obama was change.
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Original:  Not about keeping the same kind of American policy that turns a blind eye to Israel putting facts on the ground .
Revised:  Not about keeping the same kind of American policy that turns a blind eye to Israel putting facts on the ground ". He added, "
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Original:  The fact that there was no precedent actually demonstrates why there are now 300,000 settlers living in the West Bank and just 16 years ago when the Oslo Agreement was launched there were 109,000 settlers  
Revised:  The fact that there was no precedent actually demonstrates why there are now 300,000 settlers living in the West Bank and just 16 years ago when the Oslo Agreement was launched there were 109,000 settlers ." 
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Original: The concessions Mrs. Clinton referred to were part of an earlier offer by Israeli negotiators that would have stopped some settlement building in the West Bank and would have made no deal concerning the hotly contested East Jerusalem.
Revised: The concessions Mrs. Clinton referred to were part of an earlier offer by Israeli negotiators that would have stopped some settlement building in the West Bank and would have made no deal concerning Israeli expansion into hotly contested East Jerusalem.
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Original: The two people were both women.
Revised: The victims were both women.
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Original:  One of them was identified as a 34-year-old woman from the sourthern part of the island.
Revised:  One of them was identified as a 34-year-old woman from the southern part of the island.
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Original:  The other woman was identified as Marion Auril O'Hara, a 57-year-old woman from the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The other was identified as Marion Auril O'Hara, a 57-year-old woman from the United Kingdom.
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Original:  150 rescue workers digged with picks and shovels, and continued digging for over four hours.
Revised:  150 rescue workers dug with picks and shovels, and continued digging for over four hours.
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Original:   How do you rate the governments economic stimulus package?
Revised:  This is too big a question to answer in any detail, except to say that rapid changes in the A$ are not healthy, and if it rises too high it will penalize our export industries, exacerbating the trade deficit. The last thing we want is a return to the 1980s when the $A bounced around as a result of currency speculation. How do you rate the governments economic stimulus package?
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Original:   Should it be wound back?
Revised:  Overall, it was a necessary response. Should it be wound back?
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Original:  Is the Australian dollar's near parrity with the UD dollar a sign that the Australian economy is healthy, the US economy in chaos or both?"
Revised:  Is the Australian dollar's near parrity with the US dollar a sign that the Australian economy is healthy, the US economy in chaos or both?"
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Original: Why should the electorate vote for you?''' See above . Related ne
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Original: Why should the electorate vote for you?''' See above . Related ne
Revised: Why should the electorate vote for you?''' See above . 
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Original: Forcast path for Hurricane Dennis.
Revised: Forecast path for Hurricane Dennis.
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Original:  The National Weather Service expects Hurricane Dennis to become a category 4 stormbefore making landfall . Hurricane force winds extend outward 40 miles from the center , while tropical storm force winds extend outward up to 175 miles . Rainfall totals of 12 inches are expected along the United States Gulf Coast, meaning flash flooding will be a concern in many areas.
Revised:  The National Weather Service expects Hurricane Dennis to become a category 4 stormbefore making landfall . Hurricane force winds extend outward 40 miles from the center . Rainfall totals of 12 inches are expected along the United States Gulf Coast, meaning flash flooding will be a concern in many areas.
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Original:  Residents in the Florida panhandle, Alabama, Mississippi and Louisiana are all under a hurricane watch as current predictions show the storm's progression to effect those states
Revised:  Residents in the Florida panhandle, Alabama, Mississippi and Louisiana are all under a hurricane warning as current predictions show the storm's progression to effect those states
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Original: Its current location is {{Map| let =27.
Revised: Its current location is {{Map| lat =27.
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Original: Abroath is being described (BBC News) as virtually cut off, with major routes including the main railway line to Aberdeen disrupted.
Revised: Abroath is being described as virtually cut off, with major routes including the main railway line to Aberdeen disrupted.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Aberdeenshire council was quoted (BBC News) as saying.
Revised:  A spokesperson for Aberdeenshire council was quoted as saying.
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Original:  Superintendent Innes Walker of Grampian Police was quoted (The Scotsman) as advising "People should not take journeys unless absolutely necessary and they should listen to the radio for updates on road conditions.
Revised:  Superintendent Innes Walker of Grampian Police was quoted as advising "People should not take journeys unless absolutely necessary and they should listen to the radio for updates on road conditions.
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Original: Flood helpline for Aberdeenshire - 01224 665400 Scottish Environment Agency Floodline - 0845 988 1188 Parts of Scotland  including, Aberdeenshire, Arbroath, Tayside and Grampian have experienced severe flooding following heavy rains.
Revised:  Parts of Scotland including, Aberdeenshire, Arbroath, Tayside and Grampian have experienced severe flooding following heavy rains.
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Original: Flood helpline for Aberdeenshire - 01224 665400 Scottish Environment Agency Floodline - 0845 988 1188 Parts of Scotland  including, Aberdeenshire, Arbroath, Tayside and Grampian have experienced severe flooding following heavy rains.
Revised: Flood helpline for Aberdeenshire - 01224 665400 Scottish Environment Agency Floodline - 0845 988 1188 Parts of Scotland , including, Aberdeenshire, Arbroath, Tayside and Grampian have experienced severe flooding following heavy rains.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Aberdeenshire council was quoted as saying . " Our crews have been working throughout the night providing support to the emergency services, keeping roads clear as best they can and helping with the evacuation of residents.
Revised:  A spokesperson for Aberdeenshire council was quoted as saying that " Our crews have been working throughout the night providing support to the emergency services, keeping roads clear as best they can and helping with the evacuation of residents.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Aberdeenshire council was quoted as saying . " Our crews have been working throughout the night providing support to the emergency services, keeping roads clear as best they can and helping with the evacuation of residents.
Revised:  A spokesperson for Aberdeenshire council was quoted as saying . " our crews have been working throughout the night providing support to the emergency services, keeping roads clear as best they can and helping with the evacuation of residents.
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Original:  Superintendent Innes Walker of Grampian Police was quoted as advising " People should not take journeys unless absolutely necessary and they should listen to the radio for updates on road conditions.
Revised:  Superintendent Innes Walker of Grampian Police said that " People should not take journeys unless absolutely necessary and they should listen to the radio for updates on road conditions.
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Original:  Superintendent Innes Walker of Grampian Police was quoted as advising " People should not take journeys unless absolutely necessary and they should listen to the radio for updates on road conditions.
Revised:  Superintendent Innes Walker of Grampian Police was quoted as advising " people should not take journeys unless absolutely necessary and they should listen to the radio for updates on road conditions.
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Original:  "Grampian Police are working with the local authority, Scottish Ambulance Service, Grampian Fire and Rescue and the Coastguard to alleviate the problems and minimise the effects of this flooding on affected people.  
Revised:  "Grampian Police are working with the local authority, Scottish Ambulance Service, Grampian Fire and Rescue and the Coastguard to alleviate the problems and minimise the effects of this flooding on affected people. " 
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Original: File: LPD-21 sails from Mississippi.jpg|230px|USS New York travelling down the Mississippi River]] A warship built with steel from the World Trade Centre is set to enter New York and travel up the Hudson River to the site of Ground Zero.
Revised: File: LPD-21 sails from Mississippi.jpg|230px|USS New York travelling down the Mississippi River]] A warship built with steel from the World Trade Center is set to enter New York and travel up the Hudson River to the site of Ground Zero.
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Original: 150px|Gardner, 30, was celebrating Halloween when he was attacked A man was  to death in London after he attempted to retrieve a Halloween hat that had been stolen from his girlfriend.
Revised: 150px|Gardner, 30, was celebrating Halloween when he was attacked A man was beaten to death in London after he attempted to retrieve a Halloween hat that had been stolen from his girlfriend.
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Original: White House spokesman Robert Gibbs said  "Karzai has been declared the winner of the Afghan election [...] so obviously he's the legitimate leader of the country."
Revised: White House spokesman Robert Gibbs said that "Karzai has been declared the winner of the Afghan election [...] so obviously he's the legitimate leader of the country."
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Original:  Now begin the hard conversations."  ] 
Revised:  Now begin the hard conversations." and] 
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Original: US president Barack Obama , congratulated Karzai on his victory in a telephone call.
Revised: US president Barack Obama congratulated Karzai on his victory in a telephone call.
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Original:  However, he  added that Karzai should be "much more serious" about fighting corruption.
Revised:  However, he However, Obama added that Karzai should be "much more serious" about fighting corruption.
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Original:  "I emphasised that this has to be a point in time in which we write a new chapter based on improved governance, a much more serious effort to eradicate corruption [and] joint efforts to accelerate the training of Afghan security forces," Obama remarked.  ] 
Revised:  "I emphasised that this has to be a point in time in which we write a new chapter based on improved governance, a much more serious effort to eradicate corruption [and] joint efforts to accelerate the training of Afghan security forces," Obama remarked. "He ] 
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Original:  It is going to be in deeds . " 
Revised:  It is going to be in deeds , " 
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Original:  It is going to be in deeds . " 
Revised:  It is going to be in deeds . " he said.
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Original: Afghanistan's Independent Election Commission stated today that it cancelled the presidential runoff, originally scheduled for November 7, and officially declares president Hamid Karzai the winner.
Revised: Afghanistan's Independent Election Commission stated today that it cancelled the presidential runoff, originally scheduled for November 7, and officially declared president Hamid Karzai the winner.
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Original:  Damian Kirilik, 38, is believed to have killed the Oshrenko family at their home in Rishon Lezion after being fired from their restaurant   
Revised:  Damian Kirilik, 38, is believed to have killed the Oshrenko family at their home in Rishon Lezion after being fired from their restaurant . 
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Original:  Around two years ago he was sacked fom his position as head waiter and police say the years had turned this grudge into hatred  [ 
Revised:  Around two years ago he was sacked fom his position as head waiter and police say the years had turned this grudge into hatred . [ 
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Original:  Damian Kirilik, 38, is believed to have killed the Oshrenko family at their home in Rishon Lezion after being fired from their restaurant.
Revised:  Damian Kirilik, 38, is believed to have killed the Oshrenko family at their home in Rishon LeZion after being fired from their restaurant.
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Original:  The murders they are accused of involvement in have been described as "one of Israel's worst-ever [crimes]" according to the '' Agence France-Presse
Revised:  The murders they are accused of involvement in have been described as "one of Israel's worst-ever [crimes]" according to the Agence France-Presse
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Original:  Kirilik, too, had emigrated from Russia five years ago  where he is alleged to be wanted for robbery.
Revised:  Kirilik, too, had emigrated from Russia five years ago , where he is alleged to be wanted for robbery.
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Original:  Mor commented that " There is no forgiveness for such a thing." Kirilik's wife has admitted to assisting her husband in plans to rob the Oshenkos and is also in custody for assisting him, as are several other Kirilik family members.
Revised:  Mor commented that " there is no forgiveness for such a thing." Kirilik's wife has admitted to assisting her husband in plans to rob the Oshenkos and is also in custody for assisting him, as are several other Kirilik family members.
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Original:  The murders they are accused of involvement in have been described as "one of Israel's worst-ever [crimes]"  according to the Agence France-Presse 
Revised:  The murders they are accused of involvement in have been described as "one of Israel's worst-ever [crimes]" , according to the Agence France-Presse 
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Original: A court in Xinyu, China, has sentenced activists Wei Zhongping and Liu Ping to a prison sentence of six-and-a-half years under charges of "using evil religion to sabotage law enforcement" and "picking fights and provoking trouble", while a third activist Li Sihua was convicted of only the last charge.
Revised: A court in Xinyu, China, has sentenced activists Wei Zhongping and Liu Ping received a prison sentence of six-and-a-half years under charges of "using evil religion to sabotage law enforcement" and "picking fights and provoking trouble", while a third activist Li Sihua was convicted of only the last charge.
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Original:  The three  , who were associated members of the New Citizen’s Movement, were arrested last year for disrupting the public order during an anti-corruption protest that urged government officials to disclose their earnings.
Revised:  The three activists , who were associated members of the New Citizen’s Movement, were arrested last year for disrupting the public order during an anti-corruption protest that urged government officials to disclose their earnings.
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Original:  The three  , who were associated members of the New Citizen’s Movement, were arrested last year for disrupting the public order during an anti-corruption protest that urged government officials to disclose their earnings.
Revised:  The three , who were associated members of the New Citizen’s Movement, were arrested last year during an anti-corruption protest that urged government officials to disclose their earnings.
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Original:  The three  , who were associated members of the New Citizen’s Movement, were arrested last year for disrupting the public order during an anti-corruption protest that urged government officials to disclose their earnings.
Revised:  The three , who were associated members of the New Citizen’s Movement, were arrested last year for disrupting the public order during an anti-corruption protest that urged government officials to reveal their earnings.
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Original:  They were photographed with a sign that Zhou Ze, Li’s Lawyer, told the AFP that they had the possibility to appeal the charges, but felt that it was pointless because “The ruling in an appeal is already decided.”
Revised:  Zhou Ze, Li’s Lawyer, told the AFP that they had the possibility to appeal the charges, but felt that it was pointless because “The ruling in an appeal is already decided.”
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Original: Wei Zhongping and Liu Ping received a prison sentence of six-and-a-half years under charges of "using evil religion to sabotage law enforcement" and "picking fights and provoking trouble" , while a third activist Li Sihua was convicted of only the last charge.
Revised: Wei Zhongping and Liu Ping received a prison sentence of six-and-a-half years under charges of "using evil religion to sabotage law enforcement" and "picking fights and provoking trouble" . A third activist Li Sihua was convicted of only the last charge.
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