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Original:  One of this year's unfortunate guest appearances was also rendered as a hugely grotesque likeness of the U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice .
Revised:  One of this year's unfortunate guest appearances was also rendered as a hugely grotesque likeness of the U.S. Secretary of State .
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Original:  The unflattering effigy clutched a tattered U.S. flag in one hand, and a miniature Tony Blair in the other.
Revised:  The unflattering effigy clutched a tattered flag in one hand, and a miniature Tony Blair in the other.
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Original:  The unflattering effigy clutched a tattered U.S. flag in one hand, and a miniature Tony Blair in the other.
Revised:  The unflattering effigy clutched a tattered U.S. flag in one hand, and a miniature in the other.
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Original:  He died on November 5 without regaining consciousness . Category:Obituaries Category:Europe Category:Asia Category:Turkey%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% fr:Turquie : mort de l'ancien Premier ministre Bülent Ecev
Revised:  He died on November 5 without regaining consciousness Category:Obituaries Category:Europe Category:Asia Category:Turkey%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% fr:Turquie : mort de l'ancien Premier ministre Bülent Ecev
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Original:  He died on November 5 without regaining consciousness . Category:Obituaries Category:Europe Category:Asia Category:Turkey%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% fr:Turquie : mort de l'ancien Premier ministre Bülent Ecev
Revised:  He died on November 5 without regaining consciousness . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% fr:Turquie : mort de l'ancien Premier ministre Bülent Ecev
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Original:  He died on November 5 without regaining consciousness . Category:Obituaries Category:Europe Category:Asia Category:Turkey%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% fr:Turquie : mort de l'ancien Premier ministre Bülent Ecev
Revised:  He died on November 5 without regaining consciousness . Category:Obituaries Category:Europe Category:Asia Category:Turkey%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  We have to make a start and put our foot down on this.  
Revised:  We have to make a start and put our foot down on this. " 
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Original:  There was a record amount of reported fires during last night Guy Fawkes event , the festivities had emergency services stretched to the limit, a spokesman for the NZ Fire service said that it was "like driving through a war zone."
Revised:  There were a record amount of reported fires during last night Guy Fawkes event , the festivities had emergency services stretched to the limit, a spokesman for the NZ Fire service said that it was "like driving through a war zone."
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Original:  There was a record amount of reported fires during last night Guy Fawkes event , the festivities had emergency services stretched to the limit, a spokesman for the NZ Fire service said that it was "like driving through a war zone."
Revised:  There was a record amount of fire calls during Guy Fawkes night , the festivities had emergency services stretched to the limit, a spokesman for the NZ Fire service said that it was "like driving through a war zone."
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Original:  Over the Guy Fawkes weekend, November 4 - November 5, there were 784 reported fires.
Revised:  Over the Guy Fawkes weekend, November 4 - November 5, there were 784 reports of fires.
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Original:  The public is wanting to see either fireworks banned to public displays or only those who know who to correctly handle fireworks, according to " opinion polls. ..," Hall added, " the public are also sick of the danger to themselves, property and pets posed by misuse of fireworks, not to mention the late-night noise and mess associated with people letting off fireworks indiscriminately.
Revised:  The public is wanting to see fireworks restricted to public displays or only those who know who to correctly handle fireworks, according to " opinion polls. ..," Hall added, " the public are also sick of the danger to themselves, property and pets posed by misuse of fireworks, not to mention the late-night noise and mess associated with people letting off fireworks indiscriminately.
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Original:  The public is wanting to see either fireworks banned to public displays or only those who know who to correctly handle fireworks, according to " opinion polls. ..," Hall added, " the public are also sick of the danger to themselves, property and pets posed by misuse of fireworks, not to mention the late-night noise and mess associated with people letting off fireworks indiscriminately.
Revised:  The public is wanting to see either fireworks banned to public displays or licenced operators. Mr. Hall said " opinion polls. ..," Hall added, " the public are also sick of the danger to themselves, property and pets posed by misuse of fireworks, not to mention the late-night noise and mess associated with people letting off fireworks indiscriminately.
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Original:  The public is wanting to see either fireworks banned to public displays or only those who know who to correctly handle fireworks, according to " opinion polls. ..," Hall added, " the public are also sick of the danger to themselves, property and pets posed by misuse of fireworks, not to mention the late-night noise and mess associated with people letting off fireworks indiscriminately.
Revised:  The public is wanting to see either fireworks banned to public displays or only those who know who to correctly handle fireworks, according to " the public are also sick of the danger to themselves, property and pets posed by misuse of fireworks, not to mention the late-night noise and mess associated with people letting off fireworks indiscriminately.
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Original:  The lack of a major fireworks-related fire or fatality at the weekend was pure luck. 
Revised:  The lack of a major fireworks-related fire or fatality at the weekend was pure luck. "
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Original:  For the same period last year, 2005, there was only 1,632.
Revised:  For the same period last year, 2005, there were only 1,632.
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Original:  Last years numbers were also record setting at the time.
Revised:  Last year's numbers were also record setting at the time.
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Original:  There was a fight which involved 40 people, in Whitianga , police were called to break up that fight and were also called to stop youths from getting fireworks from a shop.
Revised:  There was a fight which involved 40 people, in Whitianga ; police were called to break up that fight and were also called to stop youths from getting fireworks from a shop.
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Original:  But in Tauranga, police were called to a fight party of 200 youths at 1.00 a.m.
Revised:  Also, in Tauranga, police were called to a fight party of 200 youths at 1.00 a.m.
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Original:  The police said it was as bad a New Year's Eve.
Revised:  The police said it was as bad as New Year's Eve.
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Original: Opinon polls indicate that the public is divided 50:50 over permitting the sale of fireworks, or wanting to see fireworks restricted to public displays or licenced operators.
Revised: Opinon polls indicate that the public is divided 50:50 over permitting the sale of fireworks, or wanting to see fireworks restricted to public displays or licensed operators.
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Original:  Former Liberal PM Jean Chrétien, repeatedly said in the past that Canada was working well and most people did not care about changing the Constitution  
Revised:  Former Liberal PM Jean Chrétien, repeatedly said in the past that Canada was working well and most people did not care about changing the Constitution . 
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Original:  The sovereigntists make the same mistake.  
Revised:  The sovereigntists make the same mistake. " 
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Original:  We should be focusing our attention on issues that really matter to people," says Rae  
Revised:  We should be focusing our attention on issues that really matter to people," says Rae . 
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Original: Former deputy governor Virginia Etiaba got sworn in as the Governor of Anambra, a state in south-central Nigeria, making her the first female governor in the country's history.
Revised: Former deputy governor Virginia Etiaba was sworn in as the Governor of Anambra, a state in south-central Nigeria, making her the first female governor in the country's history.
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Original:  She also finds herself criticized by a number of local religious and community leaders, who put out a statement condemning both the original impeachment of Obi as well as the promotion of Etiaba.
Revised:  Etiaba was also criticized by a number of local religious and community leaders, who put out a statement condemning both the original impeachment of Obi as well as the promotion of Etiaba.
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Original: Taiwan's president Chen Shui-bian has said that he had not added any personal money and apologized for scandal in a public speech on television for about an hour on sunday night.
Revised: Taiwan's president Chen Shui-bian has said that he had not added any personal money and apologized for scandal in an hour-long televised speech on sunday night.
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Original:  They were accused of making a large amount of illegal money in scam in June, 2002.
Revised:  They were accused of making a large amount of money illegally in scam in June, 2002.
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Original: Taiwan's president Chen Shui-bian has said that he had not added any personal money and apologized for scandal in an hour-long televised speech on sunday night.
Revised: Taiwan's president Chen Shui-bian has said that he had not made any personal money and apologized for scandal in an hour-long televised speech on sunday night.
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Original:  He also added that if the first lady of Taiwan Wu Shu-chen and himself were convicted in the court he would resign from the post.
Revised:  He also added that if the first lady of Taiwan Wu Shu-chen were convicted in the court he would resign from the post.
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Original:  They were accused of making a large amount of money illegally in scam in June, 2002.
Revised:  They were accused of making money illegally in scam in June, 2002.
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Original:  They were skimmed 14.8 million New Taiwan dollars  which is equivalent to US$450,000.
Revised:  They were accused of skimming 14.8 million New Taiwan dollars which is equivalent to US$450,000.
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Original:  They were accused of skimming 14.8 million New Taiwan dollars in the scam, which is equivalent to US$450, 000.
Revised:  They were accused of skimming 14.8 million New Taiwan dollars ( US$450, 000.
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Original: Taiwan's president Chen Shui-bian has said that he had not made any illegal personal money and apologized for scandal in an hour-long televised speech on sunday night.
Revised: Taiwan's president Chen Shui-bian has said that he had not made any money illegally and apologized for scandal in an hour-long televised speech on sunday night.
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Original:  Taiwan's main opposition party (Kuomintang Party) has launched a third bid to remove Chen from the post of president.
Revised:  Taiwan's main opposition party , the Kuomintang has launched a third bid to remove Chen from the post of president.
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Original: The Supreme Court has refused to give any relief to the traders owning unauthorised commercial establishments in today morning .
Revised: The Supreme Court has refused to grant any relief to the traders owning unauthorised commercial establishments in today morning .
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Original: The Supreme Court has refused to give any relief to the traders owning unauthorised commercial establishments in today morning .
Revised: The Supreme Court has refused to give any relief to the traders owning unauthorised commercial establishments .
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Original:  A two judge bench of SC headed by Chief Justice Y K Sabharwal that the court has not found any such basic thing which is considerable to modify our previous order regarding sealing drive.
Revised:  A two judge bench of the Supreme Court headed by Chief Justice Y K Sabharwal that the court has not found any such basic thing which is considerable to modify our previous order regarding sealing drive.
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Original:  The Delhi government and central government filed an application to review the order because of fear of violence in the city seeing the present-day situation . Apex court added that the government is not powerless to control the situation.
Revised:  The Delhi government and central government filed an application to review the order because of fear of violence in the city if the sealing is continued . Apex court added that the government is not powerless to control the situation.
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Original:  The Delhi government and central government filed an application to review the order because of fear of violence in the city seeing the present-day situation . Apex court added that the government is not powerless to control the situation.
Revised:  The Delhi government and central government filed an application to review the order because of fear of violence in the city seeing the present-day situation . The apex court added that the government is not powerless to control the situation.
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Original:  On the other hand, traders are very unhappy after the order released from the apex court . Praveen Khandelwal, Seceratary General of the Confederation of All India Traders (CAIT), said that we were expecting the apex court to take a humanitarian decision.
Revised:  On the other hand, traders are very unhappy with the court order . Praveen Khandelwal, Seceratary General of the Confederation of All India Traders (CAIT), said that we were expecting the apex court to take a humanitarian decision.
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Original:  On the other hand, traders are very unhappy after the order released from the apex court . Praveen Khandelwal, Seceratary General of the Confederation of All India Traders (CAIT), said that we were expecting the apex court to take a humanitarian decision.
Revised:  On the other hand, traders are very unhappy after the order released from the apex court . Praveen Khandelwal, Secretary General of the Confederation of All India Traders (CAIT), said that we were expecting the apex court to take a humanitarian decision.
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Original:  On the other hand, traders are very unhappy after the order released from the apex court . Praveen Khandelwal, Seceratary General of the Confederation of All India Traders (CAIT), said that we were expecting the apex court to take a humanitarian decision.
Revised:  On the other hand, traders are very unhappy after the order released from the apex court . Praveen Khandelwal, Seceratary General of the Confederation of All India Traders (CAIT), said that the traders were expecting the apex court to take a humanitarian decision.
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Original:  He added that if the sealing drive is not stopped we would start a non-cooperation movement, a nationwide strike against the government.
Revised:  He added that if the sealing drive is not stopped traders would start a non-cooperation movement, a nationwide strike against the government.
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Original:  A two judge bench of the Supreme Court  headed by Chief Justice Y K Sabharwal  that the court has not found any such basic thing which is considerable to modify our previous order regarding sealing drive.
Revised:  A two judge bench of the Supreme Court , headed by Chief Justice Y K Sabharwal that the court has not found any such basic thing which is considerable to modify our previous order regarding sealing drive.
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Original:  A two judge bench of the Supreme Court  headed by Chief Justice Y K Sabharwal  that the court has not found any such basic thing which is considerable to modify our previous order regarding sealing drive.
Revised:  A two judge bench of the Supreme Court headed by Chief Justice Y K Sabharwal , said that the court has not found any such basic thing which is considerable to modify our previous order regarding sealing drive.
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Original: The Supreme Court has refused to grant any relief to New Delhi traders owning unauthorised commercial establishments  .
Revised: The Supreme Court has refused to grant any relief to the owners of unauthorised commercial establishments .
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Original:  A two judge bench of the Supreme Court, headed by Chief Justice Y K Sabharwal, said that the court has not found any such basic thing which is considerable to modify our previous order regarding sealing drive .
Revised:  A two judge bench of the Supreme Court, headed by Chief Justice Y K Sabharwal, said today that it found no grounds for modifying its previous order to seal commercial establishments violating zoning regulations .
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Original:  The court ordered the MCD to use police force if there is any difficulty to carry out the process.
Revised:  The court ordered the MCD to use police force , if required, to carry out the process.
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Original:   MCD has decided to meet  to discuss the consequences of the Supreme Court verdict in the afternoon .
Revised:  The MCD has decided to meet to discuss the consequences of the Supreme Court verdict in the afternoon .
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Original:   MCD has decided to meet  to discuss the consequences of the Supreme Court verdict in the afternoon .
Revised:  MCD has decided to meet in the afternoon to discuss the consequences of the Supreme Court verdict in the afternoon .
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Original:   MCD has decided to meet  to discuss the consequences of the Supreme Court verdict in the afternoon .
Revised:  MCD has decided to meet to discuss the consequences of the Supreme Court verdict .
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Original: The Group of ministers previously had decided not to resume the sealing drive.
Revised: The Group of ministers had previously decided not to resume the sealing drive.
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Original:  The Delhi state government and the central government had filed an application to review the order on November 3, 2006 because of fear of violence in the city if the sealing is resumed.
Revised:  The Delhi state government and the central government had filed an application to review the order on November 3, 2006 because of fear of violence in the city if the sealing would be resumed.
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Original: A teenage Palestinian boy has been killed , and a number of others( including six children ) have been injured as a result of an Israeli airstrike near a school-bus in the town of Beit Lahiya.
Revised: A teenage Palestinian boy has been killed , and a number of others( including six children , injured in an Israeli airstrike near a school-bus in the town of Beit Lahiya.
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Original:  Israel's incurions into northern Gaza ( which it says are aimed at " curbing rocket attacks by militants") have killed over 50 people over the last six days.
Revised:  Israel's incursions into northern Gaza ( which it says are aimed at " curbing rocket attacks by militants") have killed over 50 people over the last six days.
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Original:  Israel's incurions into northern Gaza ( which it says are aimed at " curbing rocket attacks by militants") have killed over 50 people over the last six days.
Revised:  Israel's incurions into northern Gaza , which it says are aimed at " curbing rocket attacks by militants") have killed over 50 people over the last six days.
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Original:  Israel's incurions into northern Gaza ( which it says are aimed at " curbing rocket attacks by militants") have killed over 50 people over the last six days.
Revised:  Israel's incurions into northern Gaza ( which it says are aimed at curbing rocket attacks by militants") have killed over 50 people over the last six days.
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Original:  Atleast seven people, including a 12-year-old girl were killed by Israeli action on Saturday, while three other lives were taken yesterday.
Revised:  At least seven people, including a 12-year-old girl were killed by Israeli action on Saturday, while three other lives were taken yesterday.
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Original:  Atleast seven people, including a 12-year-old girl were killed by Israeli action on Saturday, while three other lives were taken yesterday.
Revised:  Atleast seven people, including a 12-year-old girl were killed by Israeli action on Saturday, and three others yesterday.
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Original:   Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council  discuss the issue.
Revised:  The Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council discuss the issue.
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Original:   Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council  discuss the issue.
Revised:  Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, and said that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council discuss the issue.
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Original:   Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council  discuss the issue.
Revised:  Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rockets from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council discuss the issue.
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Original:   Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council  discuss the issue.
Revised:  Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired into Israel by Hamas militants . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council discuss the issue.
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Original:   Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council  discuss the issue.
Revised:  Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has called for the UN Security Council discuss the issue.
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