wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The two young children were then transported to hospital but were declared deceased shortly afterwards    
Revised:  The two young children were then transported to hospital but were declared deceased shortly afterwards In Manchester Crown Court, where the five-day trial was held, Williams pleaded not guilty to two charges of murder; he made a claim that it was Morongoe, his wife, who had committed the murders. After the hearing, the jury inside the court took 1 hour and 30 minutes to deliver the verdict of guilty on both charges. Petros Williams was then sentenced to a prison sentence lasting for a minimum of 28 years. Judge Justice Kenneth Parker spoke to Petros as he was sentencing Williams, stating to him: "It is hard to conceive any more shocking crime than a parent deliberately taking the life of his or her child. 
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Original:  After recording the video, he strangled them both by using an Internet connection cables .
Revised:  After recording the video, he strangled them both .
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Original:  Some of the bodies had identification tags on them    ] 
Revised:  Eight of the bodies had identification tags on them ] 
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Original: The first ever olympic lottery scheme has been launched to the public, 7 years to the day that the Olympics will be hosted to the City of London.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Olympics Minister and Culture Secretary Tessa Jowell said the game was needed now to raise the cash necessary to develop the venues that will host the event.
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Original:  She stated: "The Lottery needs to raise altogether £1.5 billion of which we estimate that £750 million over the seven years between now and the Games will come from the new Olympic lottery game."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ms Jowell and Sebastian Coe, chairman of the London 2012 committee, were joined by an array of gold medal winners to launch the lottery game.
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Original:  Coe stated: "Camelot have a very good record for raising money, certainly for good causes.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The games go on sale on Thursday
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Original: Granville Technology Group who owns brands such as TIME and Tiny are to axe around 1,500 jobs just after the company were sunk to administration.
Revised: Granville Technology Group who owns brands such as TIME and Tiny are to axe around 1,500 jobs just after the company went into administration.
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Original:  The Company has already closed down all 78 retail stores around the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The company has already closed down all 78 retail stores around the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Its customers include businesses, schools and private individuals  and its products have been household names for years
Revised:  Its customers included businesses, schools and private individuals and its products have been household names for years
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Original:  Its customers include businesses, schools and private individuals  and its products have been household names for years
Revised:  Its customers include businesses, schools and private individuals , and its products have been household names for years
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Original: Granville Technology Group who owns brands such as TIME  and Tiny are to axe around 1,500 jobs just after the company went into administration.
Revised: Granville Technology Group , who own brands such as TIME and Tiny are to axe around 1,500 jobs just after the company went into administration.
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Original:  The company has already closed down all  78 retail stores around the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The company has already closed down all their 78 retail stores around the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Formerly known as  Time Group, it had been producing around 500,000 PCs a year.
Revised:  Formerly known as the Time Group, it had been producing around 500,000 PCs a year.
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Original:  The inspecteion will consist of 90 minute sessions, during which a three-dimensional image of the surface of the nosecone and the leading edges of the wings will be built up.
Revised:  The inspection will consist of 90 minute sessions, during which a three-dimensional image of the surface of the nosecone and the leading edges of the wings will be built up.
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Original: The crew of the Space shuttle Discovery - which launched successfully yesterday - have begun to make inspections of the exterior of the Orbiter.
Revised: The crew of the Space shuttle Discovery – which launched successfully yesterday - have begun to make inspections of the exterior of the Orbiter.
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Original: The crew of the Space shuttle Discovery - which launched successfully yesterday - have begun to make inspections of the exterior of the Orbiter.
Revised: The crew of the Space shuttle Discovery - which launched successfully yesterday – have begun to make inspections of the exterior of the Orbiter.
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Original:  They are checking for any damage that may have occured during take-off - the Columbia was destroyed  after a piece of foam falling from the external fuel tank split open a wing, allowing super-heated gas to enter the craft upon re-entry , leading to its break-up.
Revised:  They are checking for any damage that may have occured during take-off – the after a piece of foam falling from the external fuel tank split open a wing, allowing super-heated gas to enter the craft upon re-entry , leading to its break-up.
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Original:  They are checking for any damage that may have occured during take-off - the Columbia was destroyed  after a piece of foam falling from the external fuel tank split open a wing, allowing super-heated gas to enter the craft upon re-entry , leading to its break-up.
Revised:  They are checking for any damage that may have occured during take-off - the Columbia was destroyed after a piece of foam falling from the external fuel tank split open a wing, allowing super-heated gas to enter the craft upon reentry , leading to its break-up.
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Original:  The crew of Discovery are using a laser-scanner mounted on the end of the shuttle's 15m long robotic arm.
Revised:  The crew of Discovery are using a laser-scanner mounted on the end of the shuttle's 15 m long robotic arm.
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Original:  On one hand , the pro-Western ruling coalition, Democrats and Socialists, is the side that approved the resolution .
Revised:  Democrats and Socialists , the pro-Western ruling coalition, Democrats and Socialists, is the side that approved the resolution .
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Original:  They want to bring Serbia closer to become a new European Unionmember.
Revised:  They want to bring Serbia closer to 
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Original:  On the other , the nationalist opposition voted against it, saying  war crimes were made against Bosnian Serbs as well.
Revised:  On the other , the nationalist opposition voted against it, saying that war crimes were made against Bosnian Serbs as well.
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Original:  Serb Muslims lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite of the European Union and the UN war crimes tribunal in the Hague does .
Revised:  Serb Muslims lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite the term's use by the European Union and the UN war crimes tribunal in the Hague does .
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Original:  Serb Muslims lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite of the European Union and the UN war crimes tribunal in the Hague does .
Revised:  Serb Muslims lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite of the European Union and the UN war crimes tribunal in the Hague .
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Original: Srebrenica Potocari Memorial Serbia's parliament has approved a landmark resolution condemning the July 1995 Srebrenica massacre, where 8,000 Bosnian Muslim men and boys were killed by Bosnian Serb troops.
Revised: Srebrenica Potocari Memorial Serbia's parliament has approved a landmark resolution condemning the July 1995 Srebrenica massacre, in which 8,000 Bosnian Muslim men and boys were killed by Bosnian Serb troops.
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Original:  This tragedy is considered the worst atrocity carried out in Europe since  Second World War , and a symbol of the brutality of the 1992–95 Balkan wars.
Revised:  This tragedy is considered the worst atrocity carried out in Europe since the Second World War , and a symbol of the brutality of the 1992–95 Balkan wars.
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Original:  This tragedy is considered the worst atrocity carried out in Europe since  Second World War , and a symbol of the brutality of the 1992–95 Balkan wars.
Revised:  This tragedy is considered the worst atrocity carried out in Europe since Second World War and a symbol of the brutality of the 1992–95 Balkan wars.
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Original:  After 13 hours of debate, 127 of the 250 Serbia's parliament lawmakers voted for passing the landmark resolution .
Revised:  After 13 hours of debate, 127 of the 250 Serbia's parliament lawmakers voted to pass the landmark resolution .
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Original:  Democrats and Socialists, the pro-Western ruling coalition, voted in favor of the resolution because they want to bring Serbia closer to  becoming a member of the European Union.
Revised:  Democrats and Socialists, the pro-Western ruling coalition, voted in favor of the resolution because they want to bring Serbia closer to its goal of becoming a member of the European Union.
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Original:  Serb Muslims lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite the term's use by the European Union and the UN war crimes tribunal in the Hague.
Revised:  Serb Muslim lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite the term's use by the European Union and the UN war crimes tribunal in the Hague.
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Original:  Serb Muslims lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite the term's use by the European Union and the UN war crimes tribunal in the Hague.
Revised:  Serb Muslims lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite the term's use by the European Union and the United Nations war crimes tribunal in the Hague.
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Original:  Serb Muslims lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite the term's use by the European Union and the UN war crimes tribunal in the Hague.
Revised:  Serb Muslims lawmakers were not satisfied with the text because it doesn't use the word "genocide", despite the term's use by the European Union and the UN war crimes tribunal in The Hague.
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Original: After 13 hours of debate, 127 of the 250 Serbia's parliament lawmakers voted to pass the landmark resolution;
Revised: After thirteen hours of debate, 127 of the 250 Serbia's parliament lawmakers voted to pass the landmark resolution;
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Original:  The first bomb was detonated in a car , near a school, killing two police officers  .
Revised:  The first bomb was detonated in a car near a school, killing two police officers .
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Original:  Though Iran as large oil stocks, environmental concerns and the Kyoto protocol may preclude their continued development
Revised:  Though Iran as large oil stocks, environmental concerns and the Kyoto Protocol may preclude their continued development
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Original: Outgoing Iranian president Mohammad Khatami Outgoing Iranian president Mohammad Khatami said that the proposed nuclear fuel work would not include producing enriched uranium, but stressed that Iran would ultimately resume its uranium enrichment programme.
Revised: Outgoing Iranian president Mohammad Khatami said that the proposed nuclear fuel work would not include producing enriched uranium, but stressed that Iran would ultimately resume its uranium enrichment programme.
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Original: This has prompted last minute action by the President to lobby individual members of House, reminding members that Central American countries have committed troops and other resources to fight the U.S. War of Terror.
Revised: This has prompted last minute action by the President to lobby individual members of House, reminding members that Central American countries have committed troops and other resources to fight the U.S. War on Terror.
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Original:  Source: White House photo by Susan Sterner ]] President Bush is lobbying the U.S. House of Representatives to pass the Central America Free Trade Agreement (CAFTA), which is scheduled for a vote Wednesday night.
Revised:  ]] President Bush is lobbying the U.S. House of Representatives to pass the Central America Free Trade Agreement (CAFTA), which is scheduled for a vote Wednesday night.
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Original:  An investigation has also been opened into the incident  
Revised:  An investigation has also been opened into the incident . 
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Original: Skyservice, a Canadian charter airline  has cancelled several flights from Toronto's Pearson International Airport, with reports that the airline has ceased operations.
Revised: Skyservice, a Canadian charter airline , has cancelled several flights from Toronto's Pearson International Airport, with reports that the airline has ceased operations.
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Original:  The company cites debt levels and changes in the vacation travel market with it's decision to shut down operations and file for receivership.
Revised:  The company cites debt levels and changes in the vacation travel market with its decision to shut down operations and file for receivership.
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Original:  Skyservice has stated that it will work with it's partner companies and other providers to ensure customers stranded by the airline's sudden shutdown are dealt with effectively, according to a company representative.
Revised:  Skyservice has stated that it will work with its partner companies and other providers to ensure customers stranded by the airline's sudden shutdown are dealt with effectively, according to a company representative.
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Original: The Servicio Médico Legal  of Rancagua, Chile boss, Juan Díaz Menares, was suspended from his job because he used a public bus to transport the body of three year-old Juanita Carey.
Revised: The Servicio Médico Legal of Rancagua, Chile boss, Juan Díaz Menares, was suspended from his job for using a public bus to transport the body of three year-old Juanita Carey.
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Original:  The decision was taken by the administrative lawyer in the case, Hernán Rojas, who is heading the investigation about the irregular move of the body.
Revised:  The decision was made by the administrative lawyer in the case, Hernán Rojas, who is heading the investigation about the irregular move of the body.
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Original:  The decision was taken by the administrative lawyer in the case, Hernán Rojas, who is heading the investigation about the irregular move of the body.
Revised:  The decision was taken by the administrative lawyer in the case, Hernán Rojas, who is heading the investigation into the irregular move of the body.
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Original:  Díaz was defending the sending of the body via a public bus, ensuring that "the procedure was right, because it was sent as it is established".
Revised:  Díaz defends the sending of the body via a public bus, ensuring that "the procedure was right, because it was sent as it is established".
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Original:  "There's a aberrant situation at a national level, not just this", said Díaz;
Revised:  "There's an aberrant situation at a national level, not just this", said Díaz;
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Original:  A Pullman Cargo representive reported to Radio Cooperativa that the body was sent last Friday from Pichilemu to Santiago via bus, and that the container did not have any description of what it contained, beyond saying "fragile".
Revised:  A Pullman Cargo representive reported to Radio Cooperativa that the body was sent last Friday from Pichilemu to Santiago via bus, and that the container did not have any description of what it contained, beyond the word "fragile".
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Original:  The body of the child will be cremated today, and his ashes  buried in Santiago, Chile.
Revised:  The body of the child will be cremated today, and his ashes will be buried in Santiago, Chile.
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Original:  They also said that "it was not paid a express sent, that could allow them to deliver that Saturday, not last Monday".
Revised:  They also said that "it was not even paid for express mail, which would have allowed the delivery to occur on Saturday, not last Monday".
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Original: "Everything that comes out of here, biologic or bony samples, as in this case, go out from the safekeeping chain", he also said.
Revised: "Everything that comes out of here, biological or bony samples, as in this case, go out from the safekeeping chain", he also said.
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Original: The Chilean Army's Hydrographic Service (SHOA) has been very criticized lately because of their performance in front of the tsunami that hit the coast of Chile in February 27.
Revised: The Chilean Army's Hydrographic Service (SHOA) has been criticized for of their response to a tsunami that hit the coast of Chile in February 27.
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Original: The Chilean Army's Hydrographic Service (SHOA) has been very criticized lately because of their performance in front of the tsunami that hit the coast of Chile in February 27.
Revised: The Chilean Army's Hydrographic Service (SHOA) has been very criticized lately because of their performance in front of the tsunami that hit the coast of Chile on February 27.
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Original:  Last Tuesday, this service published in their web page a complete report about the proceeding of SHOA in which they admitted the difficulty to catch every single member of their Maritime and Naval networks.
Revised:  Last Tuesday, the service published a complete report about the proceeding of SHOA in which they admitted the difficulty to catch every single member of their Maritime and Naval networks.
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Original:  They reported that the Tsunami warning was executed at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, which identity "was not possible to determine", but that sent the info via fax.
Revised:  They reported that the tsunami warning was executed at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, which identity "was not possible to determine", but that sent the info via fax.
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Original: The Chilean Army's Hydrographic Service (SHOA) has been criticized for of their response to a tsunami that hit the coast of Chile on February 27.
Revised: The Chilean Army's Hydrographic Service (SHOA) has been criticized for their response to a tsunami that hit the coast of Chile on February 27.
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Original:  Last Tuesday, the service published a complete report about the proceeding of SHOAin which they admitted the difficulty to catch every single member of their Maritime and Naval networks.
Revised:  Last Tuesday, the service published a complete report about SHOA's actions, admitting the difficulty to catch every single member of their Maritime and Naval networks.
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Original:  They reported that the tsunami warning was executed at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, which identity "was not possible to determine", but that sent the info via fax.
Revised:  They reported that the tsunami warning was activated at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, which identity "was not possible to determine", but that sent the info via fax.
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Original:  They reported that the tsunami warning was executed at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, which identity "was not possible to determine", but that sent the info via fax.
Revised:  They reported that the tsunami warning was executed at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, whose identity "was not possible to determine", but that sent the info via fax.
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Original:  They reported that the tsunami warning was activated at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, whose identity "was not possible to determine", but that sent the info via fax.
Revised:  They reported that the tsunami warning was activated at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, whose identity "was not possible to determine", but who sent the info via fax.
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Original:  Despite the  tsunami warning was accomplished 17 minutes after the earthquake, the Army said that it is a "adecuated time for this kind of events, considering the time required to obtain the info of the epicentre and magnitude."
Revised:  Despite the fact that the tsunami warning was accomplished 17 minutes after the earthquake, the Army said that it is a "adecuated time for this kind of events, considering the time required to obtain the info of the epicentre and magnitude."
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Original:  Despite the  tsunami warning was accomplished 17 minutes after the earthquake, the Army said that it is a "adecuated time for this kind of events, considering the time required to obtain the info of the epicentre and magnitude."
Revised:  Despite the tsunami warning was activated 17 minutes after the earthquake, the Army said that it is a "adecuated time for this kind of events, considering the time required to obtain the info of the epicentre and magnitude."
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Original:  The tsunami arrived at the following time, as reported the Army : Pichilemu: 03:48 (06:48 UTC);
Revised:  The tsunami arrived at the following time, as the Army reported : Pichilemu: 03:48 (06:48 UTC);
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Original:  Last Tuesday, the service published a complete report about SHOA's actions, admitting the difficulty to catch every single member of their Maritime and Naval networks.
Revised:  Last Tuesday, the service published a complete report about its actions, recognizing the difficulty of arriving at every member of their Maritime and Naval networks.
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Original:  They reported that the tsunami warning was activated at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, whose identity "was not possible to determine" , but who sent the info via fax.
Revised:  They reported that the tsunami warning was activated at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, whose identity "was not possible to determine" ; the operator sent the alert via fax.
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Original:  The warning was ended at 04:56 local time (07:56 UTC) by SHOA director Mariano Rojas, who is now dismissed.
Revised:  The warning was ended at 04:56 local time (07:56 UTC) by SHOA director Mariano Rojas, who has since been dismissed.
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Original:  The tsunami arrived at the following time , as the Army reported: Pichilemu: 03:48 (06:48 UTC);
Revised:  The tsunami arrived at the following times , as the Army reported: Pichilemu: 03:48 (06:48 UTC);
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