wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  It is self-reported or can be recorded by some poor sap with no life . Components The information contained in a sleep diary includes some or all of the following points: The time the person had wanted or intended to wake up The time the person woke up Whether the person woke up spontaneously, by an alarm clock, or because of another (specified) disturbance The time the person got out of bed A few words about how the person felt during the day (mood, drowsiness, etc.)
Revised:  It is self-reported or can be recorded by a care-giver . Components The information contained in a sleep diary includes some or all of the following points: The time the person had wanted or intended to wake up The time the person woke up Whether the person woke up spontaneously, by an alarm clock, or because of another (specified) disturbance The time the person got out of bed A few words about how the person felt during the day (mood, drowsiness, etc.)
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Original:  coke, X, Special K, dope, speed, acid, and shrooms The time and type/ heaviness of evening meal Activities the last hour before bedtime, such as meditation, watching TV, playing PC-games Stress level before bedtime, often on a scale from 1 to 5 and the major cause The time the person tried to fall asleep The time the person thinks sleep onset occurred Activity during aforementioned two moments (remaining eyes closed, meditating, masturbating ...)
Revised:  coke, X, Special K, dope, speed, acid, and shrooms The time and type/ heaviness of evening meal Activities the last hour before bedtime, such as meditation, watching TV, playing PC-games Stress level before bedtime, often on a scale from 1 to 5 and the major cause The time the person tried to fall asleep The time the person thinks sleep onset occurred Activity during aforementioned two moments (remaining eyes closed, meditating, ...)
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Original:  The presumed cause, number, time, and length of any nighttime awakenings and activities during these moments Quality of sleep Level of comfortableness of any recalled good or bad dreams Data collection Sleep logs are often chiseled on stone tablets , as a rule one week per page.
Revised:  The presumed cause, number, time, and length of any nighttime awakenings and activities during these moments Quality of sleep Level of comfortableness of any recalled good or bad dreams Data collection Sleep logs are often hand-drawn on graph paper , as a rule one week per page.
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Original:  Specialized software for creating sleep logs is boring ;
Revised:  Specialized software for creating sleep logs is also available ;
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Original:  Edward Gorzelanczyk, with link to SleepChart application (Windows) - Japanese Killer Seizure Robots Category:Sleep Category:Sleep disorders Category:Circadian rhythms Category:Bori
Revised:  Edward Gorzelanczyk, with link to SleepChart application (Windows) Category:Sleep Category:Sleep disorders Category:Circadian rhythms Category:Bori
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Original:  Edward Gorzelanczyk, with link to SleepChart application (Windows) - Japanese Killer Seizure Robots Category:Sleep Category:Sleep disorders Category:Circadian rhythms Category:Bori
Revised:  Edward Gorzelanczyk, with link to SleepChart application (Windows) - Japanese Killer Seizure Robots Category:Sleep Category:Sleep disorders Category:Circadian rhyth
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Original: 200px| A sleep diary with nighttime in the middle and the weekend in the middle, to better notice trends A sleep diary is a record of an individual's sleeping and waking times with related information, usually over a period of several weeks.
Revised:  A sleep diary is a record of an individual's sleeping and waking times with related information, usually over a period of several weeks.
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Original:  The event in Thiaroye sent shockwaves throughout French West Africa .
Revised:  The event in Thiaroye sent shockwaves throughout French West Africa .
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Original:  Columbia University granted him a scholarship for graduate school, but his Master of Fine Arts degree is from the University of New Mexico in Albuquerque URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Influences and themes Witkin claims that his vision and sensibility spring from an episode he witnessed as a young child, an automobile accident in front of his house in which a little girl was decapitated.
Revised:  Columbia University granted him a scholarship for graduate school, but his Master of Fine Arts degree is from the University of New Mexico in Albuquerque URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Joel-Peter Witkin's photograph "Sanitarium" inspired the final presentation of Alexander McQueen's Spring/Summer 2001 collection based on avian imagery, the walls of another box within the faux psychiatric ward collapsed to reveal a startling tableau vivant: a reclining, masked nude breathing through a tube and surrounded by fluttering moths.
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Original:  Chronology%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1939: Born in Brooklyn September 13, 1939 to Max and Mary (Pellegrino) Witkin.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1939: Born in Brooklyn September 13, 1939 to Max and Mary (Pellegrino) Witkin.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Notes External links Joel-Peter Witkin:
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Joel-Peter Witkin:
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Original:  Group show at the Whitney Biennial 1986: Received his M.F.A. at U.N. Mex . Exhibited in Galerie Baudoin Lebon, Paris.
Revised:  Group show at the Whitney Biennial 1986: Received his M.F.A. at University of New Mexico . Exhibited in Galerie Baudoin Lebon, Paris.
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Original:  His twin brother, Jerome Witkin, Jewish Virtual Library and son Kersen Witkin, are also painters.
Revised:  His twin brother, Jerome Witkin, and son Kersen Witkin, are also painters.
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Original:  Jewish Virtual Library Documentary In July 2011, filming began on the feature-length documentary, Joel-Peter Witkin: An Objective Eye.
Revised:  Documentary In July 2011, filming began on the feature-length documentary, Joel-Peter Witkin: An Objective Eye.
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Original:  Joel-Peter Witkin: An Objective Eye |Joel-Peter Witkin: An Objective Eye (2013) - IMDb 1939: Born in Brooklyn September 13, 1939 to Max and Mary (Pellegrino) Witkin.
Revised:  1939: Born in Brooklyn September 13, 1939 to Max and Mary (Pellegrino) Witkin.
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Original:  Exhibited in Pace Wildenstein MacGill Gallery, NYC. Joel-Peter Witkin Exhibited in Photo Picture Space Gallery Osaka, Japan 1994: Exhibited in Galerie Baudoin Lebon, Paris.
Revised:  Exhibited in Pace Wildenstein MacGill Gallery, NYC. Exhibited in Photo Picture Space Gallery Osaka, Japan 1994: Exhibited in Galerie Baudoin Lebon, Paris.
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Original: " The Birth & Resurrection of Postmortem Photography, Merchant's House Museum, New York, NY, NYC Merchant's House Museum Hosts Post-Mortem Photography Exhibit, 9/9-11/29 2010/08/06 Exhibited in "Decadence Now!" BRNO House of Arts, Czech Republic Dům umění města Brna / The Brno House of Arts 2012: Exhibited in Heaven or Hell, Bibliothèque nationale de France, URL 2013: Exhibited in "Vanitas: Joel-Peter Witkin en Chile", Biblioteca Nacional de Chile, Santiago.
Revised: " The Birth & Resurrection of Postmortem Photography, Merchant's House Museum, New York, NY, Exhibited in "Decadence Now!" BRNO House of Arts, Czech Republic Dům umění města Brna / The Brno House of Arts 2012: Exhibited in Heaven or Hell, Bibliothèque nationale de France, URL 2013: Exhibited in "Vanitas: Joel-Peter Witkin en Chile", Biblioteca Nacional de Chile, Santiago.
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Original: " The Birth & Resurrection of Postmortem Photography, Merchant's House Museum, New York, NY, NYC Merchant's House Museum Hosts Post-Mortem Photography Exhibit, 9/9-11/29 2010/08/06 Exhibited in "Decadence Now!" BRNO House of Arts, Czech Republic Dům umění města Brna / The Brno House of Arts 2012: Exhibited in Heaven or Hell, Bibliothèque nationale de France, URL 2013: Exhibited in "Vanitas: Joel-Peter Witkin en Chile", Biblioteca Nacional de Chile, Santiago.
Revised: " The Birth & Resurrection of Postmortem Photography, Merchant's House Museum, New York, NY, NYC Merchant's House Museum Hosts Post-Mortem Photography Exhibit, 9/9-11/29 2010/08/06 Exhibited in "Decadence Now!" BRNO House of Arts, Czech Republic 2012: Exhibited in Heaven or Hell, Bibliothèque nationale de France, URL 2013: Exhibited in "Vanitas: Joel-Peter Witkin en Chile", Biblioteca Nacional de Chile, Santiago.
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Original: " The Birth & Resurrection of Postmortem Photography, Merchant's House Museum, New York, NY, NYC Merchant's House Museum Hosts Post-Mortem Photography Exhibit, 9/9-11/29 2010/08/06 Exhibited in "Decadence Now!" BRNO House of Arts, Czech Republic Dům umění města Brna / The Brno House of Arts 2012: Exhibited in Heaven or Hell, Bibliothèque nationale de France, URL 2013: Exhibited in "Vanitas: Joel-Peter Witkin en Chile", Biblioteca Nacional de Chile, Santiago.
Revised: " The Birth & Resurrection of Postmortem Photography, Merchant's House Museum, New York, NY, NYC Merchant's House Museum Hosts Post-Mortem Photography Exhibit, 9/9-11/29 2010/08/06 Exhibited in "Decadence Now!" BRNO House of Arts, Czech Republic Dům umění města Brna / The Brno House of Arts 2012: Exhibited in Heaven or Hell, Bibliothèque nationale de France, Paris. 2013: Exhibited in "Vanitas: Joel-Peter Witkin en Chile", Biblioteca Nacional de Chile, Santiago.
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Original: Those of Witkin's works which use corpses have had to be created in Mexico in order to get around restrictive US laws.
Revised: Those of Witkin's works which use corpses have had to be created in Mexico to get around restrictive US laws.
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Original: The National Council for the Defense of DemocracyForces for the Defense of Democracy (, or CNDD–FDD) is the major political party in Burundi.
Revised: The National Council for the Defense of DemocracyForces for the Defense of Democracy (, CNDD–FDD) is the major political party in Burundi.
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Original:  In May 1998, Jean-Bosco Ndayikengurukiye, Nyangoma's chief of staff, caused a schism by ousting the latter over leadership issues and losses suffered by the group during the First Congo URL p. 8 the Nyangoma-led faction later taking a seat at the Arusha negotiations, while the Ndayikengurukiye's faction carried out its fight.
Revised:  In May 1998, Jean-Bosco Ndayikengurukiye, Nyangoma's chief of staff, caused a schism by ousting the latter over leadership issues and losses suffered by the group during the First Congo URL p. 8 the Nyangoma-led faction later taking a seat at the Arusha negotiations, while Ndayikengurukiye's faction carried out its fight.
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Original: National Assembly elections ElectionParty leaderVotes\%Seats+/– PositionGovernment2005Hussein Radjabu1,417,80058.
Revised: National Assembly elections ElectionParty leaderVotes\%Seats+/– PositionResult2005Hussein Radjabu1,417,80058.
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Original: 98\% 1st Senate elections ElectionParty leaderSeats+/– PositionGovernment2005Hussein Radjabu 32 1st2010Jérémie Ngendakumana 1st2015Pascal Nyabenda 1 1st2020 1 1st
Revised: 98\% 1st Senate elections ElectionParty leaderSeats+/– PositionResult2005Hussein Radjabu 32 1st2010Jérémie Ngendakumana 1st2015Pascal Nyabenda 1 1st2020 1 1st
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Original:  Gartner filed a motion to dismiss by claiming First Amendment protection since it contends that its MQ reports contain "pure opinion , "  which legally means opinions which are not based on fact.
Revised:  Gartner filed a motion to dismiss by claiming First Amendment protection since it contends that its MQ reports contain "pure opinion " which legally means opinions which are not based on fact.
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Original:  Gartner filed a motion to dismiss by claiming First Amendment protection since it contends that its MQ reports contain "pure opinion , "  which legally means opinions which are not based on fact.
Revised:  Gartner filed a motion to dismiss by claiming First Amendment protection since it contends that its MQ reports contain "pure opinion , " , which legally means opinions which are not based on fact.
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Original:  Using a methodology which Gartner does not disclose, these component scores lead to a vendor position in one of four quadrants: Leaders – Vendors in the Leaders quadrant have the highest composite scores for their Completeness of Vision and Ability to Execute.
Revised:  These component scores lead to a vendor position in one of four quadrants: Leaders – Vendors in the Leaders quadrant have the highest composite scores for their Completeness of Vision and Ability to Execute.
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Original:  This quadrant may also include vendors that are adapting their existing products to enter the market under consideration, or larger vendors having difficulty developing and executing on their vision   .
Revised:  This quadrant may also include vendors that are adapting their existing products to enter the market under consideration, or larger vendors having difficulty developing and executing on their vision . .
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Original: Completeness of Vision : Reflects the vendor’s innovation, whether the vendor drives or follows the market, and if the vendor’s view of how the market will develop matches Gartner’s perspective.
Revised: Completeness of Vision Reflects the vendor’s innovation, whether the vendor drives or follows the market, and if the vendor’s view of how the market will develop matches Gartner’s perspective.
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Original:  Ability to Execute : Summarizes factors such as the vendor’s financial viability, market responsiveness, product development, sales channels and customer base.
Revised:  Ability to Execute Summarizes factors such as the vendor’s financial viability, market responsiveness, product development, sales channels and customer base.
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Original:  These component scores lead to a vendor position in one of four quadrants: Leaders – Vendors in the Leaders quadrant have the highest composite scores for their Completeness of Vision and Ability to Execute.
Revised:  These component scores lead to a vendor position in one of four quadrants: Leaders Vendors in the Leaders quadrant have the highest composite scores for their Completeness of Vision and Ability to Execute.
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Original:  Challengers – A vendor in the Challengers quadrant participates in the market and executes well enough to be a serious threat to vendors in the Leaders quadrant.
Revised:  Challengers A vendor in the Challengers quadrant participates in the market and executes well enough to be a serious threat to vendors in the Leaders quadrant.
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Original:  Visionaries – A vendor in the Visionaries quadrant delivers innovative products that address operationally or financially important end-user problems at a broad scale, but has not yet demonstrated the ability to capture market share or sustainable profitability.
Revised:  Visionaries A vendor in the Visionaries quadrant delivers innovative products that address operationally or financially important end-user problems at a broad scale, but has not yet demonstrated the ability to capture market share or sustainable profitability.
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Original:  Niche Players – Vendors in the Niche Players quadrant are often narrowly focused on specific market or vertical segments.
Revised:  Niche Players Vendors in the Niche Players quadrant are often narrowly focused on specific market or vertical segments.
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Original:  Owner's Brian F. Cieloha Jr. Brian F. Cieloha 3rd.
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Original:  and the Junghars in the late Renaissance. cite book |last=Beckwith |first=Christopher I. |title=Empires of the Silk Road:A History of Central Eurasia from the Bronze Age to the Present |date=2009 |publisher=Princeton University Press URL In the founding myth of the Chou dynasty Lady Yuan of the Chiang makes a sacrifice to conceive, then becomes pregnant after stepping into the footprint of the King of Heaven.
Revised:  and the Junghars in the late Renaissance. In the founding myth of the Chou dynasty Lady Yuan of the Chiang makes a sacrifice to conceive, then becomes pregnant after stepping into the footprint of the King of Heaven.
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Original: An origin myth is a myth that purports to describe the origin of some feature of the natural or social world.
Revised: An is the truth and describes the origin of some feature of the natural or social world.
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Original: An origin myth is a myth that purports to describe the origin of some feature of the natural or social world.
Revised: An origin myth is a myth that purports to describe the origin of some the world.
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Original:  One type of origin myth is the cosmogonic myth, which describes the creation of the world.
Revised:  One type is the creation of the world.
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Original: An is the truth and describes the origin of some the world.
Revised: An origin myth is a myth that purports to describe the origin of some the world.
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Original: An is the truth and describes the origin of some the world.
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Original:  One type is the creation of the world.
Revised:  One type of origin myth is the cosmogonic myth, which describes the creation of the world.
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Original: An origin myth is a myth that purports to describe the origin of some feature of the natural or social world.
Revised: An origin myth is a myth that describes the origin of some feature of the natural or social world.
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Original:  One type of origin myth is the cosmogonic myth, which describes the creation of the world.
Revised:  One type of origin myth is the creation, or cosmogenic myth, one that describes the creation of the world.
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Original:  In the founding myth of the Chou dynasty , Lady Yuan of the Chiang makes a sacrifice to conceive, then becomes pregnant after stepping into the footprint of the King of Heaven.
Revised:  In the founding myth of the Zhou dynasty in China , Lady Yuan of the Chiang makes a sacrifice to conceive, then becomes pregnant after stepping into the footprint of the King of Heaven.
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Original:  In the founding myth of the Chou dynasty , Lady Yuan of the Chiang makes a sacrifice to conceive, then becomes pregnant after stepping into the footprint of the King of Heaven.
Revised:  In the founding myth of the Chou dynasty , Lady Yuan makes a ritual sacrifice to conceive, then becomes pregnant after stepping into the footprint of the King of Heaven.
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Original:  She gives birth to a son, Hou Ji, who she leaves alone in dangerous places where he is protected by sheep, cattle, birds, and woodcutters.
Revised:  She gives birth to a son, Hou Ji, whom she leaves alone in dangerous places where he is protected by sheep, cattle, birds, and woodcutters.
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Original:  His mother, then convinced that he is a supernatural being, takes him in and raises him.
Revised:  Convinced that he is a supernatural being, takes him in and raises him.
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Original:  His mother, then convinced that he is a supernatural being, takes him in and raises him.
Revised:  His mother, then convinced that he is a supernatural being, she takes him back and raises him.
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Original:  When he grows to adulthood, he takes the position of Master of Horses in the court of Emperor Yao, and also becomes very successful at growing useful crops, like grains, gourds and beans.
Revised:  When he grows to adulthood, he takes the position of Master of Horses in the court of Emperor Yao, and becomes successful at growing useful crops, like grains, gourds and beans.
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Original:  When he grows to adulthood, he takes the position of Master of Horses in the court of Emperor Yao, and also becomes very successful at growing useful crops, like grains, gourds and beans.
Revised:  When he grows to adulthood, he takes the position of Master of Horses in the court of Emperor Yao, and also becomes very successful at growing grains, gourds and beans.
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Original:  According to the legend, he becomes founder of the Chou dynasty after overthrowing the evil ruler of Shang.
Revised:  According to the legend, he becomes founder of the Zhou dynasty after overthrowing the evil ruler of Shang.
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Original:  One type of origin myth is the creation, or cosmogenic myth, one that describes the creation of the world.
Revised:  One type of origin myth is the creation, or cosmogonic myth, one that describes the creation of the world.
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Original:  One type of origin myth is the creation , or cosmogonic myth, one that describes the creation of the world.
Revised:  One type of origin myth is the creation or cosmogonic myth, one that describes the creation of the world.
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Original: Most habitants gre?w crops that satisfied their own household needs for food and clothing rather than grow crops to sell on the market.
Revised: Most habitants grew crops that satisfied their own household needs for food and clothing rather than grow crops to sell on the market.
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Original:  They also moved to New France so they could have larger land holdings which eventually they would pass on to their children. 
Revised:  They also moved to New France so they could have larger land holdings which eventually they would pass on to their children. hi
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Original:  Seigneurs also received "lods et ventes" if habitants sold  their land, which was equivalent to one-twelfth of the sale price.
Revised:  Seigneurs also received "lods et ventes" if habitants sold ugly their land, which was equivalent to one-twelfth of the sale price.
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Original: File:Cornelius Krieghoff 001.jpg|250px|Habitants by Cornelius Krieghoff (1852)]] upHabitant in winter dress, by F.A. Hopkins (1858) .
Revised: File:Cornelius Krieghoff 001.jpg|250px|Habitants by Cornelius Krieghoff (1852)]] upHabitant in winter dress, by F.A. Hopkins (1858) 
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Original:  When an habitant was granted the title deed to a lot, he had to agree to accept a variety of annual charges and restrictions.
Revised:  When a habitant was granted the title deed to a lot, he had to agree to accept a variety of annual charges and restrictions.
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Original:  See also Seigneurial system of New France Indentured servitude in British America Serfdom External links Government of Canada, Canadian Museum of Civilization - The Habitant in New France Category:French Canadian culture Category:French-American culture in Missouri Category:French-Canadian culture in the United States Category:  New France Category:17th century in Quebec Category:Pre-Confederation Quebec peop
Revised:  See also Seigneurial system of New France Indentured servitude in British America Serfdom External links Government of Canada, Canadian Museum of Civilization - The Habitant in New France Category:French Canadian culture Category:French-American culture in Missouri Category:French-Canadian culture in the United States Category: History of Canada Category:History of Quebec Category: New France Category:17th century in Quebec Category:Pre-Confederation Quebec peop
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