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Original:   Luckily,the bacteria are not very harmful to an average person, but many sensitive groups  could get sick from it  
Revised:  The bacteria are not very harmful to an average person, but many sensitive groups could get sick from it 
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Original:  A random study found unusually high rates of heterotrophic bacteria in the bottled water, even more than 500 cfu, the legal limit set by United States Pharmacopeia on how much bacteria should be present in drinking water in Canada.
Revised:  A random study found unusually high rates of heterotrophic bacteria in the bottled water, more than 500 cfu, the legal limit set by United States Pharmacopeia on how much bacteria should be present in drinking water in Canada.
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Original:  "Heterotrophic bacteria counts in some of the bottles were found to be in revolting figures of (100) times more than the permitted limit," said Sonish Azam, a Canadian researcher from C-crest Laboratories in Montreal , “This amount of bacteria is alarming, as if we are ingesting a cup of culture...
Revised:  "Heterotrophic bacteria counts in some of the bottles were found to be in revolting figures of (100) times more than the permitted limit," said Sonish Azam, a Canadian researcher involved in the study , “This amount of bacteria is alarming, as if we are ingesting a cup of culture...
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Original:  "Heterotrophic bacteria counts in drinking water are not a health concern to the general public," was the concluding analyses by a recent study by The World Health Organization.
Revised:  "Heterotrophic bacteria counts in drinking water are not a health concern to the general public," was the concluding analyses of a recent study by The World Health Organization.
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Original: Bottled water Canadian researchers from C-crest Laboratories  discovered an "unusually high" amount of bacteria in bottled water.
Revised: Bottled water Canadian researchers from C-crest Laboratories have discovered an "unusually high" amount of bacteria in bottled water.
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Original:  "Heterotrophic bacteria counts in drinking water are not a health concern to the general public," was the concluding analyses of a recent study by The World Health Organization.
Revised:  "Heterotrophic bacteria counts in drinking water are not a health concern to the general public," was the concluding analyses of a recent study by the World Health Organization.
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Original: <center> Bottled water Canadian researchers from C-crest Laboratories have discovered an "unusually high" amount of bacteria in bottled water.
Revised:  Bottled water Canadian researchers from C-crest Laboratories have discovered an "unusually high" amount of bacteria in bottled water.
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Original:  " Heterotrophic bacteria counts in some of the bottles were found to be in revolting figures of (100) times more than the permitted limit, " said Sonish Azam, a Canadian researcher involved in the study, “This amount of bacteria is alarming, as if we are ingesting a cup of culture. ..
Revised:  “ Heterotrophic bacteria counts in some of the bottles were found to be in revolting figures of (100) times more than the permitted limit, " said Sonish Azam, a Canadian researcher involved in the study, “This amount of bacteria is alarming, as if we are ingesting a cup of culture. ..
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Original:  " Heterotrophic bacteria counts in some of the bottles were found to be in revolting figures of (100) times more than the permitted limit, " said Sonish Azam, a Canadian researcher involved in the study, “This amount of bacteria is alarming, as if we are ingesting a cup of culture. ..
Revised:  " Heterotrophic bacteria counts in some of the bottles were found to be in revolting figures of (100) times more than the permitted limit, ” said Sonish Azam, a Canadian researcher involved in the study, “This amount of bacteria is alarming, as if we are ingesting a cup of culture. ..
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Original:  " Heterotrophic bacteria counts in some of the bottles were found to be in revolting figures of (100) times more than the permitted limit, " said Sonish Azam, a Canadian researcher involved in the study, “This amount of bacteria is alarming, as if we are ingesting a cup of culture. ..
Revised:  " Heterotrophic bacteria counts in some of the bottles were found to be in revolting figures of (100) times more than the permitted limit, " said Sonish Azam, a Canadian researcher involved in the study, “This amount of bacteria is alarming, as if we are ingesting a cup of culture. ” “
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Original:  Microbiologically speaking,  tap water is purer than bottled water -- most bottled water.
Revised:  Microbiologically speaking, ” she said, “ tap water is purer than bottled water -- most bottled water.
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Original:  Microbiologically speaking,  tap water is purer than bottled water -- most bottled water.
Revised:  Microbiologically speaking, tap water is purer than bottled water — most bottled water.
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Original:  We didn't know this until we conducted the research. "
Revised:  We didn't know this until we conducted the research. ”
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Original:  The ongoing crisis looked to be coming to an end when the WFP said an agreement had been made on 5 August, but the hijackers have told the UN IRIN news service that they have refused to sign the agreement.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Initially the hijackers asked for half a million dollars but have sinced claimed that people in their home communities have been neglected despite being badly affected by the tsunami.
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Original:  Food aid to Somalia has been suspended since the hijacking over a month ago
Revised:  NIGGA STOLE MY BIKE! 17460716
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Original:  Begich claims. thumbnail|Senator Mark Begich Last September, the state of Alaska made a public notice about Shell's desire to drill off the coast of the Beaufort Sea placing two experimental drilling rigs on two prospects ( "Torpedo" and "Sivulliq" ), sending the MV Frontier Discoverer .
Revised:  Begich claims. thumbnail|Senator Mark Begich Last September, the state of Alaska made a public notice about Shell's desire to drill off the coast of the Beaufort Sea placing two experimental drilling rigs on two two drill site locations; "Torpedo" and "Sivulliq" ), sending the MV Frontier Discoverer .
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Original:  Begich claims. thumbnail|Senator Mark Begich Last September, the state of Alaska made a public notice about Shell's desire to drill off the coast of the Beaufort Sea placing two experimental drilling rigs on two prospects ( "Torpedo" and "Sivulliq" ), sending the MV Frontier Discoverer .
Revised:  Begich claims. thumbnail|Senator Mark Begich Last September, the state of Alaska made a public notice about Shell's desire to drill off the coast of the Beaufort Sea placing two experimental drilling rigs on two prospects ( "Torpedo" and "Sivulliq" .
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Original:  Shell Oil Company, pitches that their drilling can be done safely and effectively stating "Shell is committed to undertaking a safe and environmentally responsible exploration program in the Chukchi Sea and Beaufort Sea in 2010," Shell Oil Co.
Revised:  "Shell is committed to undertaking a safe and environmentally responsible exploration program in the Chukchi Sea and Beaufort Sea in 2010," Shell Oil Co.
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Original:  Shell Oil Company, pitches that their drilling can be done safely and effectively stating "Shell is committed to undertaking a safe and environmentally responsible exploration program in the Chukchi Sea and Beaufort Sea in 2010," Shell Oil Co.
Revised:  Shell Oil Company, pitches that their drilling can be done safely and effectively stating "Shell is committed to undertaking a safe and environmentally responsible exploration program in the Chukchi Sea and Beaufort Sea in 2010," Shell Oil Company
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Original:  Odum believes that the climate in the arctic will make any spill less harsh on the environment, due to the lack of weathering on the oil , and the oilnot spreading as far, allowing more time to respond to any crisis that may arise.
Revised:  Odum believes that the climate in the arctic will make any spill less harsh on the environment, due to the lack of weathering on the oil , and allowing more time to respond to any crisis that may arise.
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Original:  Odum believes that the climate in the arctic will make any spill less harsh on the environment, due to the lack of weathering on the oil , and the oilnot spreading as far, allowing more time to respond to any crisis that may arise.
Revised:  Odum believes that the climate in the arctic will make any spill less harsh on the environment, due to the lack of weathering on the oil , and the oilnot spreading as far, allowing more time to respond ."
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Original:  This is not the first time that President Obama's administration has taken the environmentally cautious path in Alaska , the president put Bristol Bay off limits to oil and gas exploration through 2017.
Revised:  This is not the first time that President Obama's administration has taken the environmentally cautious path in Alaska . The President put Bristol Bay off limits to oil and gas exploration through 2017.
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Original:  This is not the first time that President Obama's administration has taken the environmentally cautious path in Alaska , the president put Bristol Bay off limits to oil and gas exploration through 2017.
Revised:  This is not the first time that President Obama's administration has taken the environmentally cautious path in Alaska , the president put Bristol Bay off limits to oil and gas exploration until 2017.
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Original:  Officials have said that 17 Spanish troops have been killed and that five  are missing.
Revised:  Officials have said that 17 Spanish troops have been killed and that five others are missing.
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Original:  It is  unknown whether the crash was the result of an accident or an attack by the Taliban or Al Qaida 
Revised:  It is yet unknown whether the crash was the result of an accident or an attack by the Taliban or Al Qaida 
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Original:  Officials have said that 12 Spanish soldiers and 5 crewmembers have been killed and that five others are missing.
Revised:  Officials have said that 12 Spanish soldiers and five crewmembers have been killed and that five others are missing.
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Original:  It is yet  unknown whether the crash was the result of an accident or an attack by the Taliban or Al Qaida however a  spokesman for the Spanish prime minister told CNN that there were no indications that the chopper was brought down by enemy fire  
Revised:  It is yet It is presently unknown whether the crash was the result of an accident or an attack by the Taliban or Al Qaida however a spokesman for the Spanish prime minister told CNN that there were no indications that the chopper was brought down by enemy fire 
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Original:  It is yet  unknown whether the crash was the result of an accident or an attack by the Taliban or Al Qaida however a  spokesman for the Spanish prime minister told CNN that there were no indications that the chopper was brought down by enemy fire  
Revised:  It is yet unknown whether the crash was the result of an accident or an attack by the Taliban or Al Qaida . spokesman for the Spanish prime minister told CNN that there were no indications that the chopper was brought down by enemy fire 
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Original:  It is yet  unknown whether the crash was the result of an accident or an attack by the Taliban or Al Qaida however a  spokesman for the Spanish prime minister told CNN that there were no indications that the chopper was brought down by enemy fire  
Revised:  It is yet unknown whether the crash was the result of an accident or an attack by the Taliban or Al Qaida however a spokesman for the Spanish prime minister told CNN that there were no indications that the chopper was brought down by enemy fire . 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External Links Registration information Picture of plan
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Picture of plan
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Original:  USGS initially reported the earthquake as 7.6 , later as 7.2 , but they later downgraded it.
Revised:  USGS initially reported the earthquake as 7.6 , but they later downgraded it.
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Original:  A 5.2 aftershock was reported later by USGS.
Revised:  5.2 aftershock was reported later by USGS.
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Original:  NOAA Pacific Tsunami Warning Center  issued a tsunami warning for Vanuatu, Solomon Islands and New Caledonia.
Revised:  The Pacific Tsunami Warning Center issued a tsunami warning for Vanuatu, Solomon Islands and New Caledonia.
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Original:  Magnitude 5.7, 5.2 and 6.4 aftershocks were reported later by USGS   .
Revised:  Magnitude 5.7, 5.2 and 6.4 aftershocks were reported later by USGS . .
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Original:  Justice John Paul Stevens has given prosecutors until Friday to respond to that motion  
Revised:  Justice John Paul Stevens has given prosecutors until Friday to respond to that motion . 
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Original: The US Air Force (USAF) said that the scramjet was able to fly for 200 seconds, achieving a top speed of around Mach 5 and setting a new record for what the Air Force called "the longest supersonic combustion ramjet-powered hypersonic flight."
Revised: The United States Air Force (USAF) said that the scramjet was able to fly for 200 seconds, achieving a top speed of around Mach 5 and setting a new record for what the Air Force called "the longest supersonic combustion ramjet-powered hypersonic flight."
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Original: An artist's rendition of the Boeing X-51A Waverider The experimental Boeing X-51A Waverider scramjet managed to break a hypersonic flight record Wednesday during a test flight.
Revised: An artist's rendition of the Boeing X-51A Waverider The managed to break a hypersonic flight record Wednesday during a test flight.
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Original:  The United States Air Force (USAF) said that the scramjet was able to fly for 200 seconds, achieving a top speed of around Mach 5 and setting a new record for what the Air Force called "the longest supersonic combustion ramjet-powered hypersonic flight."
Revised:  The United States (USAF) said that the scramjet was able to fly for 200 seconds, achieving a top speed of around Mach 5 and setting a new record for what the Air Force called "the longest supersonic combustion ramjet-powered hypersonic flight."
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Original:  The United States Air Force (USAF) said that the scramjet was able to fly for 200 seconds, achieving a top speed of around Mach 5 and setting a new record for what the Air Force called "the longest supersonic combustion ramjet-powered hypersonic flight."
Revised:  The United States Air Force (USAF) said that the scramjet was able to fly for 200 seconds, achieving a top speed of around 5 and setting a new record for what the Air Force called "the longest supersonic combustion ramjet-powered hypersonic flight."
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Original:  This hypersonic flight, also the first to use hydrocarbon fuel, was hailed by US government officials as a success.
Revised:  This hypersonic flight, also the first to use fuel, was hailed by US government officials as a success.
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Original:  The X-51 is 14 feet (4.2 metres) long and has no real wings, allowing it to withstand the shock wave created during flight.
Revised:  The X-51 is 14 feet (4.2 metres) long and has no real wings, allowing it to withstand the created during flight.
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Original:  The aircraft launched around 10 a.m. PDT (1700 UTC) from Edwards Air Force Base in California.
Revised:  The aircraft launched around 10 a.m. (1700 UTC) from Edwards Air Force Base in California.
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Original:  The aircraft launched around 10 a.m. PDT (1700 UTC) from Edwards Air Force Base in California.
Revised:  The aircraft launched around 10 a.m. PDT (1700 ) from in California.
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Original:  It was carried by a Boeing B-52 Stratofortress to a height of 50,000 feet (15,240 metres) and then released over the Point Mugu Naval Air Warfare Center Sea Range.
Revised:  It was carried by a to a height of 50,000 feet (15,240 metres) and then released over the Point Mugu Naval Air Warfare Center Sea Range.
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Original:  It was carried by a Boeing B-52 Stratofortress to a height of 50,000 feet (15,240 metres) and then released over the Point Mugu Naval Air Warfare Center Sea Range.
Revised:  It was carried by a Boeing B-52 Stratofortress to a height of 50,000 feet (15,240 metres) and then released over the Naval Air Warfare Center Sea Range.
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Original: The United States United States Air Force| Air Force (USAF) said that the scramjet was able to fly for 200 seconds, achieving a top speed of around 5 and setting a new record for what the Air Force called "the longest supersonic combustion ramjet-powered hypersonic flight."
Revised: The United States Air Force (USAF) said that the scramjet was able to fly for 200 seconds, achieving a top speed of around 5 and setting a new record for what the Air Force called "the longest supersonic combustion ramjet-powered hypersonic flight."
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Original:  It has been revealed , in documents leaked to the ITN news services, that Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on London's underground on 22 July , was not acting suspiciously.
Revised: London Underground It has been revealed , in documents leaked to the ITN news services, that Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on London's underground on 22 July , was not acting suspiciously.
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Original:  It has been revealed , in documents leaked to the ITN news services, that Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on London's underground on 22 July , was not acting suspiciously.
Revised:  It has been revealed in documents leaked to the ITN news services, that Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on London's underground on 22 July , was not acting suspiciously.
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Original:  It has been revealed , in documents leaked to the ITN news services, that Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on London's underground on 22 July , was not acting suspiciously.
Revised:  It has been revealed , in documents leaked to the ITN news service that the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on London's underground on 22 July , was not acting suspiciously.
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Original:  It has been revealed , in documents leaked to the ITN news services, that Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on London's underground on 22 July , was not acting suspiciously.
Revised:  It has been revealed , in documents leaked to the ITN news services, that Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on the London Underground on 22 July , was not acting suspiciously.
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Original:  It has been revealed , in documents leaked to the ITN news services, that Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on London's underground on 22 July , was not acting suspiciously.
Revised:  It has been revealed , in documents leaked to the ITN news services, that Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on London's underground on 22 July was not acting suspiciously.
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Original:  However, the leaked documents, which include reports from officers involved in the operation and photographs of the scene, show that he behaved like any other commuter, used his travel pass to enter the station, even picking up a newspaper on his way.
Revised:  However, the leaked documents, which include statements from officers involved in the operation and photographs of the scene, show that he behaved like any other commuter, used his travel pass to enter the station, even picking up a newspaper on his way.
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Original:  A leaked document describes CCTV footage, which shows Mr de Menezes entered Stockwell station at a "normal walking pace" and descended slowly on an escalator.
Revised:  The leaked document describes CCTV footage, which shows Mr de Menezes entered Stockwell station at a "normal walking pace" and descended slowly on an escalator.
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Original:  Furthermore, the documents reveal that the original report given by the police and recorded on the official coroners report contained many false statements.
Revised:  Furthermore, the documents reveal that the original report given by the police and recorded on the coroners report contained many false statements.
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Original:  The reports suggest the police shot that Jean Charles de Menezes because they mistakenly identified him as Hussain Osman, and had agreed to shoot him if he ran.
Revised:  The reports suggest the police shot Jean Charles de Menezes because they mistakenly identified him as Hussain Osman, and had agreed to shoot him if he ran.
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Original: Documents, reportedly leaked from the investigation into the death of Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on the London Underground on 22 July reveal that Mr de Menezes was not acting suspiciously and was in already restrained when shot.
Revised: Documents, reportedly leaked from the investigation into the death of Jean Charles de Menezes, the Brazilian electrician shot dead by British Police on the London Underground on 22 July reveal that Mr de Menezes was not acting suspiciously and was allready restrained when shot.
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Original:  That remains the case    ."
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Original:  Ms. Wistrich also claimed, in an interview with the BBC, that the documents suggest that the original information given to the pathologist who carried out the post-mortem examination on Mr de Menezes was incorrect .
Revised:  Ms. Wistrich also claimed, in an interview with the BBC, that the documents suggest that the original information given to the pathologist who carried out the post-mortem examination on Mr de Menezes was incorrect 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Harriet Wistrich, solicitor for the family of Mr de Menezes, said the information the leaked documents contained was "  terrifying".
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% and that the information the leaked documents contained was " terrifying".
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Original:   Former Flying Squad commander John O'Connor told the BBC "had the normal procedures taken place in which a warning is given and officers wear specially marked clothing then this young man may not have been killed   ."
Revised:  Former Flying Squad commander John O'Connor told the BBC "had the normal procedures taken place in which a warning is given and officers wear specially marked clothing then this young man may not have been killed ." ."
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Original:  Photographs leaked to ITN appear to collaborate this new witnesses report as they clearly show blood on the seat in which de Menezes is said to have been sitting.
Revised:  Photographs leaked to ITN appear to corroborate this new witness's report as they clearly show blood on the seat in which de Menezes is said to have been sitting.
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Original:  Paul was yesterday joined by UNSC representatives to welcome the new CEP in , the CEP headquarters.
Revised:  Paul was yesterday joined by foreign diplomats to welcome the new CEP in , the CEP headquarters.
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