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Original:  Acting U.S. Attorney Michael Loucks on Wednesday said Tarek Mehanna has been charged with conspiracy to provide material support to terrorists.
Revised:  Acting U.S. Attorney Michael Loucks said on Wednesday that Tarek Mehanna has been charged with conspiracy to provide material support to terrorists.
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Original:  Loucks said Mehanna and his co-conspirators had multiple discussions about obtaining automatic weapons for the mall attack, but that the plan was abandoned because they could not obtain what they wanted.
Revised:  According to Loucks, Mehanna and his co-conspirators had multiple discussions about obtaining automatic weapons for the mall attack, but that the plan was abandoned because they could not obtain what they wanted.
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Original:  The official said Mehanna discussed other plots, including wanting to kill two members of the Executive Branch of the U.S. government.
Revised:  The official said Mehanna discussed other plots, including wanting to kill two members of the Executive Branch of the US government.
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Original:  Prosecutors allege that Mehanna and his conspirators discussed their desire for a "violent jihad against American interests," including U.S. and allied forces in Iraq, and that they talked about their desire to "die on the battlefield."
Revised:  Prosecutors have alledged that Mehanna and his conspirators discussed their desire for a "violent jihad against American interests," including U.S. and allied forces in Iraq, and that they talked about their desire to "die on the battlefield."
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Original:  Prosecutors allege that Mehanna and his conspirators discussed their desire for a "violent jihad against American interests," including U.S. and allied forces in Iraq, and that they talked about their desire to "die on the battlefield."
Revised:  Prosecutors allege that Mehanna and his conspirators discussed their desire for a "violent jihad against American interests," including US and allied forces in Iraq, and that they talked about their desire to "die on the battlefield."
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Original:  He said Abousamra is now in Syria .
Revised:  He said Abousamra is now in Syria 
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Original:  Some information for this report was provided by AFP, AP and Reuters
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Original:  The official said Mehanna discussed other plots, including wanting to kill two members of the Executive Branch of the US government.
Revised:  He added that Mehanna discussed other plots, including wanting to kill two members of the Executive Branch of the US government.
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Original:  If convicted, Mehanna faces up to 15 years in prison on the charge of material support of terrorism.
Revised:  If convicted, Mehanna faces up to fifteen years in prison on the charge of material support of terrorism.
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Original:  A statement by the Justice Department read that " mehanna and the co-conspirators had multiple conversations about obtaining automatic weapons and randomly shooting people in a shopping mall, and that the conversations went so far as to discuss the logistics of a mall attack, including coordination, weapons needed and the possibility of attacking emergency responders."
Revised:  A statement by the Justice Department read that " Mehanna and the co-conspirators had multiple conversations about obtaining automatic weapons and randomly shooting people in a shopping mall, and that the conversations went so far as to discuss the logistics of a mall attack, including coordination, weapons needed and the possibility of attacking emergency responders."
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Original:  He said Abousamra is now in Syria  
Revised:  He said Abousamra is now in Syria . 
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Original:  Acting US Attorney Michael Loucks said on Wednesday that Tarek Mehanna , aged 27, has been charged with conspiracy to provide material support to terrorists.
Revised:  Acting US Attorney Michael Loucks said on Wednesday that Tarek Mehanna has been charged with conspiracy to provide material support to terrorists.
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Original:  According to Loucks, Mehanna and his co-conspirators had multiple discussions about obtaining automatic weapons for the mall attack, but that the plan was abandoned because they could not obtain what they wanted . Prosecutors have alledged that Mehanna and his conspirators discussed their desire for a "violent jihad against American interests," including US and allied forces in Iraq, and that they talked about their desire to "die on the battlefield."
Revised:  According to Loucks, Mehanna and his co-conspirators had multiple discussions about obtaining automatic weapons for the mall attack, but that the plan was abandoned because they could not obtain what they wanted . Prosecutors have alleged that Mehanna and his conspirators discussed their desire for a "violent jihad against American interests," including US and allied forces in Iraq, and that they talked about their desire to "die on the battlefield."
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Original:  Mehanna's lawyer, J. W. Carney, who spoke to reporters after the plea was held, didn't say which way Mehanna would plead  
Revised:  Mehanna's lawyer, J. W. Carney, who spoke to reporters after the plea was held, didn't say which way Mehanna would plead . 
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Original:  Today , Tony Kelly,  lawyer of Al Megrahi, responded to the claims made, saying : " It 's absolutely untrue.
Revised:  Today , Tony Kelly, the lawyer of Al Megrahi, responded to the claims made, saying : " It 's absolutely untrue.
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Original:  Today , Tony Kelly,  lawyer of Al Megrahi, responded to the claims made, saying : " It 's absolutely untrue.
Revised:  Today , Tony Kelly, lawyer of Al Megrahi, responded to the claims made, saying that " It 's absolutely untrue.
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Original:  Today , Tony Kelly,  lawyer of Al Megrahi, responded to the claims made, saying : " It 's absolutely untrue.
Revised:  Today , Tony Kelly, lawyer of Al Megrahi, responded to the claims made, saying : " it 's absolutely untrue.
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Original:  The information could not be confirmed, and it was not immediately clear where Sky News received their information.
Revised:  The information could not be confirmed, and it was not immediately clear where Sky News had obtained their information.
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Original:  Al Megrahi is suffering from terminal prostate cancer.
Revised:  Megrahi is suffering from terminal prostate cancer.
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Original:  On Wednesday, Tony Kelly, the lawyer of Al Megrahi , responded to the claims made, saying that "it's absolutely untrue.
Revised:  On Wednesday, Megrahi's lawyer, Tony Kelly , responded to the claims made, saying that "it's absolutely untrue.
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Original:  The form I would like it to take is the groundwork for a ratifiable agreement next year," commented Boer    
Revised:  The form I would like it to take is the groundwork for a ratifiable agreement next year," commented Boer . 
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Original: Officials are trying their best to narrow down issues which countries agree on, like certain plans and the common goal to limit emissions.
Revised: Officials are trying their best to narrow down issues which countries agree on, such as certain plans and the common goal to limit emissions.
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Original: The 192 countries which make up the w: United Nations show the gaps in-between their ideas.
Revised: The 192 countries which make up the United Nations show the gaps in-between their ideas.
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Original:  "The most likely form any agreement will take will be a political declaration," said Nigel Purvis, State Department climate negotiator during the w: Clinton Administration and Bush administration
Revised:  "The most likely form any agreement will take will be a political declaration," said Nigel Purvis, State Department climate negotiator during the Clinton Administration and Bush administration
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Original: International climate negotiations for a global climate treaty are not producing  required results in the given amount of time left before the Copenhagen conference in December .
Revised: International climate negotiations for a global climate treaty are not producing the required results in the given amount of time left before the Copenhagen conference in December .
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Original:  Major polluters have already decided that the only way for a plan of this scale to take effect is to have steps towards an agreement instead of forcing through a treaty which is not entirely supportable . Major countries are likely to propose steps at the Copenhagen Meeting.
Revised:  Major polluters have already decided that the only way for a plan of this scale to take effect is to have steps towards an agreement instead of creating a plan which takes immediate affect . Major countries are likely to propose steps at the Copenhagen Meeting.
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Original: Major polluters have already decided that the only way for a plan of this scale to take effect is to have steps towards an agreement instead of creating a plan which takes immediate affect . Major countries are likely to propose steps at the Copenhagen Meeting.
Revised: Major polluters have already decided that the only way for a plan of this scale to take effect is to have steps towards the reduction of greenhouse gases instead of creating a plan which takes immediate affect . Major countries are likely to propose steps at the Copenhagen Meeting.
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Original:  Although there are many observers who believe that United States President Barack Obama would take leadership of these discussions, Obama has shown no interest in leading the negotiations.
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Original:  Wealthier nations are planning to help poor countries with enforcing climate laws and investing in newer technology.
Revised:  Wealthier nations are planning to help poorer countries with enforcing climate laws and investing in newer technology.
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Original:  16 of the largest polluters have already begun planning on how to aid poorer countries.
Revised:  16 of the largest polluters have already begun planning on aiding poorer countries.
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Original:  Officials are trying their best to narrow down issues which countries agree on, such as certain plans and the common goal to limit emissions.
Revised:  Officials are attempting to narrow down issues which countries agree on, such as certain plans and the common goal to limit emissions.
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Original:  Officials are trying their best to narrow down issues which countries agree on, such as certain plans and the common goal to limit emissions.
Revised:  Officials are trying their best to narrow down issues which countries agree on, such as certain steps and the common goal to limit emissions.
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Original:  Until it is shown that all countries participating will uphold the treaty, nations are unwilling to enforce it within their own country.
Revised:  Until it is shown that all countries participating will uphold the treaty, nations are unwilling to enforce a treaty within their own country.
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Original:  Although there are hopes of progress in Copenhagen,  radical change is unlikely to happen . "The most likely form any agreement will take will be a political declaration," said Nigel Purvis, State Department climate negotiator during the Clinton Administration and Bush administration
Revised:  Although there are hopes of progress in Copenhagen, radical change is unlikely . "The most likely form any agreement will take will be a political declaration," said Nigel Purvis, State Department climate negotiator during the Clinton Administration and Bush administration
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Original:  Many bodies are yet to be recovered from the Russell Square train
Revised:  Bodies are yet to be recovered from the Russell Square train
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Original:  Bodies are yet to be recovered from the Russell Square train  
Revised:  Bodies are yet to be recovered from the Russell Square train . 
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Original: In a press conference this morning, the Metropolitan Police have announced that the death toll from yesterday's bombing has risen to "more than 50".
Revised: In a press conference this morning, the Metropolitan Police Service has announced that the death toll from yesterday's bombing has risen to "more than 50".
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Original:  Bodies are yet to be recovered from  Piccadilly line train caught between Kings Cross and Russell Square.
Revised:  Some bodies have yet to be recovered from Piccadilly line train caught between Kings Cross and Russell Square.
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Original:  Bodies are yet to be recovered from  Piccadilly line train caught between Kings Cross and Russell Square.
Revised:  Bodies are yet to be recovered from the Piccadilly line train caught between Kings Cross and Russell Square.
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Original:  Because he has attempted to silence a critic by circumventing (and thereby devaluing) the First Amendment -- which he publically (and in this proceeding) claims to love -- he should be deeply ashamed."
Revised:  Because he has attempted to silence a critic by circumventing (and thereby devaluing) the First Amendment -- which he publicly (and in this proceeding) claims to love -- he should be deeply ashamed."
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Original: (Washington) Diego Montoya (2007 file photo)A federal judge in Miami handed down the sentence to 48-year-old Diego Montoya,  two months after he pleaded guilty to murder, drug trafficking and racketeering charges.
Revised:  Diego Montoya (2007 file photo)A federal judge in Miami handed down the sentence to 48-year-old Diego Montoya, two months after he pleaded guilty to murder, drug trafficking and racketeering charges.
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Original:  At the proceedings, Montoya apologized for his past actions, saying he hoped his sentence would bring a measure of relief to victims and their families.
Revised:  At the proceedings, Montoya apologised for his past actions, saying he hoped his sentence would bring a measure of relief to victims and their families.
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Original:  Montoya was charged with heading the Norte Valle cartel, which rose to become Colombia's most powerful cocaine cartel after the demise of the Medellin and Cali cartels in the mid-1990s.
Revised:  Montoya had been charged with heading the Norte Valle cartel, which rose to become Colombia's most powerful cocaine cartel after the demise of the Medellin and Cali cartels in the mid-1990s.
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Original:  Federal officials say at the cartel 's peak, it supplied 60 percent of all Colombian cocaine transported to the United States .
Revised:  Federal officials said that the cartel supplied 60 percent of all Colombian cocaine transported to the United States .
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Original:  Federal officials say at the cartel 's peak, it supplied 60 percent of all Colombian cocaine transported to the United States .
Revised:  Federal officials say at the cartel 's peak, it supplied 60 \% of all Colombian cocaine transported to the United States .
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Original:  Montoya,  known as Don Diego, was arrested in 2007 and extradited to the U.S. last year.
Revised:  Montoya, also known as Don Diego, was arrested in 2007 and extradited to the U.S. last year.
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Original:  Montoya,  known as Don Diego, was arrested in 2007 and extradited to the U.S. last year.
Revised:  Montoya, known as Don Diego, was arrested in 2007 and extradited to the US last year.
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Original:  Montoya was once on the FBI's 10-most wanted listalongside al-Qaida leader Osama bin Laden.
Revised:  He was once on the FBI's 10-most wanted listalongside al-Qaida leader Osama bin Laden.
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Original:  Montoya was once on the FBI's 10-most wanted listalongside al-Qaida leader Osama bin Laden.
Revised:  Montoya was once on the FBI's top-ten most-wanted list, alongside al-Qaeda leader Osama bin Laden.
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Original:  Last April, a U.S. District judge in Florida sentenced Montoya's younger brother, Eugenio, to 30 years in prison on charges including conspiracy to import cocaine and obstruction of justice.
Revised:  Last April, a US district judge in Florida sentenced Montoya's younger brother, Eugenio, to 30 years in prison on charges including conspiracy to import cocaine and obstruction of justice.
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Original:  Last April, a U.S. District judge in Florida sentenced Montoya's younger brother, Eugenio, to 30 years in prison on charges including conspiracy to import cocaine and obstruction of justice.
Revised:  Last April, a U.S. District judge in Florida sentenced Montoya's younger brother, Eugenio, to thirty years in prison on charges including conspiracy to import cocaine and obstruction of justice.
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Original:  The U.S. government says the Norte Valle cartel used "violence and murder" to prevent people from passing information to law enforcement officials and to "instill fear.
Revised:  The US government said that the Norte Valle cartel used "violence and murder" to prevent people from passing information to law enforcement officials and to "instill fear.
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Original:  " Some information for this report was provided by AP and Reuters
Revised:  Some information for this report was provided by AP and Reuters
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Original:  " Some information for this report was provided by AP and Reuters
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Original:  The number of casualties is increasing minute-by-minute,” he said in a telephone interview   .
Revised:  The number of casualties is increasing minute-by-minute,” he said in a telephone interview . .
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Original:  Islamist militant group Al-Shabab  and its allies control a large portion of southern Somalia after a nearly three-year war against the Western-backed Somali government
Revised:  The Al-Shabab and its allies control a large portion of southern Somalia after a nearly three-year war against the Western-backed Somali government
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Original:  Islamist militant group Al-Shabab  and its allies control a large portion of southern Somalia after a nearly three-year war against the Western-backed Somali government
Revised:  Islamist militant group Al-Shabab group and its allies control a large portion of southern Somalia after a nearly three-year war against the Western-backed Somali government
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Original: (New Delhi) Congress party workers wave party flags and dance to celebrate their victory in the Maharashtra State elections at the party state headquarters in Mumbai, India, 22 Oct 2009India 's ruling Congress Party-led alliance has scored victories in elections held in three states to choose local governments.
Revised:  Congress party workers wave party flags and dance to celebrate their victory in the Maharashtra State elections at the party state headquarters in Mumbai, India, 22 Oct 2009India 's ruling Congress Party-led alliance has scored victories in elections held in three states to choose local governments.
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Original: (New Delhi) Congress party workers wave party flags and dance to celebrate their victory in the Maharashtra State elections at the party state headquarters in Mumbai, India, 22 Oct 2009India 's ruling Congress Party-led alliance has scored victories in elections held in three states to choose local governments.
Revised: (New Delhi) India 's ruling Congress Party-led alliance has scored victories in elections held in three states to choose local governments.
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Original: (New Delhi) Congress party workers wave party flags and dance to celebrate their victory in the Maharashtra State elections at the party state headquarters in Mumbai, India, 22 Oct 2009India 's ruling Congress Party-led alliance has scored victories in elections held in three states to choose local governments.
Revised: (New Delhi) Congress party workers wave party flags and dance to celebrate their victory in the Maharashtra State elections at the party state headquarters in Mumbai, India, 22 Oct 2009India 's ruling Congress Party-led alliance scored victories in elections held in three states to choose local governments.
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Original:  The results will boost the Congress Party  as it re-emerges as the country's major political force.
Revised:  The results will boost the Congress Party , as it re-emerges as the country's major political force.
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Original:  As results from elections held last week in three Indian states poured in Thursday, the Congress Party had much to celebrate .
Revised:  The results from the elections, which were held last week in three Indian states poured in Thursday, the Congress Party had much to celebrate .
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Original:  As results from elections held last week in three Indian states poured in Thursday, the Congress Party had much to celebrate .
Revised:  As results from elections held last week , began to come in on Thursday .
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Original:  The party and its allies scored clear wins in two states - the western state of Maharashtra , and the northeastern Arunachal Pradesh state.
Revised:  The party and its allies scored clear wins in two states : the western state of Maharashtra , and the northeastern Arunachal Pradesh state.
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Original:  The party and its allies scored clear wins in two states - the western state of Maharashtra , and the northeastern Arunachal Pradesh state.
Revised:  The party and its allies scored clear wins in two states - the western state of Maharashtra and the northeastern Arunachal Pradesh state.
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Original:  The largest and most influential of these states is Maharashtra state, an industrialized region which is home to India's financial capital, Mumbai  .
Revised:  The largest and most influential of these states is Maharashtra state, an industrialized region which is home to India's financial capital, w:Mumbai .
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Original:  The largest and most influential of these states is Maharashtra state, an industrialized region which is home to India's financial capital, Mumbai  .
Revised:  The largest and most influential of these states is Maharashtra state, an industrialized region which is home to India's financial capital, Mumbai | .
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Original:  Ashok Chavan is the state's Chief Minister.
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Original:  Five months ago, the party scored an unexpectedly decisive victory in national elections , trouncing its main opposition, the Hindu nationalist Bharatiya Janata Party  .
Revised:  Five months ago, the party scored a victory in national elections , trouncing its main opposition, the Hindu nationalist Bharatiya Janata Party .
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Original:  Five months ago, the party scored an unexpectedly decisive victory in national elections , trouncing its main opposition, the Hindu nationalist Bharatiya Janata Party  .
Revised:  Five months ago, the party scored an unexpectedly decisive victory in national elections over its main opposition, the Hindu nationalist Bharatiya Janata Party .
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Original:  Five months ago, the party scored an unexpectedly decisive victory in national elections , trouncing its main opposition, the Hindu nationalist Bharatiya Janata Party  .
Revised:  Five months ago, the party scored an unexpectedly decisive victory in national elections , trouncing its main opposition, the Hindu nationalist Bharatiya Janata Party (BJP) .
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Original:  Thursday's results are being seen as another major vote of confidence for the party, and its national leadership.
Revised:  Thursday's results have widely been seen as another major vote of confidence for the party, and its national leadership.
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