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Original:  He visited Shakespeare's birthplace,  now a museum and  attended a scene from Shakespeare's "", his favourite play,  sitting in the "sun-drenched" garden.
Revised:  He visited Shakespeare's birthplace, now a museum and attended a scene from Shakespeare's "", his favourite play, while sitting in the "sun-drenched" garden.
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Original:  The announcement, made before Wen's meeting with today , will be discussed along with the issue of  .
Revised:  The announcement, made before Wen's meeting today with , was likely discussed along with the issue of .
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Original:  There are expected to be protests outside , similar to those seen at Wen's visits to industrial sites.
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Original:  The goal of the visit, part of a three-nation tour of Europe , during which Wen is touring diverse British industries , is the strengthening of economic ties between the two countries.
Revised:  The goal of the visit, part of a three-nation tour of Europe , is the strengthening of economic ties between the two countries.
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Original:  Reportedly China and Britain will announce contracts worth over one billion pounds.
Revised:  Today, China and Britain will announce contracts worth over one billion pounds.
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Original:  Reportedly China and Britain will announce contracts worth over one billion pounds.
Revised:  Reportedly China and Britain announced contracts worth over one billion pounds.
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Original:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition that focused on the Philippine island of 
Revised:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition that focused on the Philippine island of .
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Original: The expedition leader, Terry Gosliner, an who is also dean of science at the California academy, said, "The Philippines is one of the hottest of the for diverse and threatened life on Earth.
Revised: The expedition leader, Terry Gosliner, an who is also Dean of Science at the California academy, said, "The Philippines is one of the hottest of the for diverse and threatened life on Earth.
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Original:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition , ending in early June, that focused on the Philippine island of  .
Revised:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition focused on the Philippine island of .
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Original:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition , ending in early June, that focused on the Philippine island of  .
Revised:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition , ending in early June, that focused on the Philippine island of that ended in early June .
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Original:  Academy scientists who work in exotic places frequently discover new species, commonly only a few at one time , so finding 300 creatures that may represent previously unknown plants and animals on a single expedition is considered to be extraordinary, according to SF Gate.
Revised:  Academy scientists who work in exotic places frequently discover new species, commonly only a few at one time . Finding 300 creatures that may represent previously unknown plants and animals on a single expedition is considered to be extraordinary, according to SF Gate.
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Original:  Academy scientists who work in exotic places frequently discover new species, commonly only a few at one time , so finding 300 creatures that may represent previously unknown plants and animals on a single expedition is considered to be extraordinary, according to SF Gate.
Revised:  Academy scientists who work in exotic places frequently discover new species, commonly only a few at one time , so finding 300 species that may be unknown on a single expedition is considered to be extraordinary, according to SF Gate.
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Original:  The findings will be confirmed using microscopes and DNA sequencing .
Revised:  The findings will be confirmed using microscopes and .
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Original:  The identification, and the scientific description and classified of each specimen as new or old, could take many months and even years.
Revised:  The identification, and the scientific description and classified of each specimen as new or old, could take many months or even years.
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Original:  On the 42-day expedition, academy officials said in the news release that "the scientists discovered more than 300 species that are likely new to science, including dozens of new insects and spiders, deep-sea armored , ornate s, bizarre new s and s, a shrimp-eating , and over 50 colorful new s.
Revised:  On the 42-day expedition, academy officials said in the news release that the creatures found include " dozens of new insects and spiders, deep-sea armored , ornate s, bizarre new s and s, a shrimp-eating , and over 50 colorful new s.
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Original: Location of Luzon Scientists have identified more than 300 previously unknown species of land and sea creatures and plants , according to a news release from the .
Revised: Location of Luzon Scientists have identified more than 300 previously unknown species of land and sea creatures , according to a news release from the .
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Original:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition  focused on the Philippine island of that ended in early June .
Revised:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition that ended in early June, and focused on the Philippine island of that ended in early June .
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Original:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition  focused on the Philippine island of that ended in early June .
Revised:  They were discovered on a six-week-long expedition focused on the Philippine island of .
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Original:  The identification, and the scientific description and classified of each specimen as new or old, could take many months or even years.
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Original:  The identification, and the scientific description and classified of each specimen as new or old, could take many months or even years.
Revised:  The identification, and the scientific description and classification of each specimen as new or old, could take many months or even years.
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Original: Described by the as a "mild-mannered, slight figure who suffers from liver ailments", Hu, 37, a prominent Chinese dissident , had spent years campaigning for , for the , and on behalf of suffers of before his imprisonment.
Revised: Described by the as a "mild-mannered, slight figure who suffers from liver ailments", the 37-year-old Hu is a prominent Chinese dissident , had spent years campaigning for , for the , and on behalf of suffers of before his imprisonment.
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Original: Described by the as a "mild-mannered, slight figure who suffers from liver ailments", Hu, 37, a prominent Chinese dissident , had spent years campaigning for , for the , and on behalf of suffers of before his imprisonment.
Revised: Described by the as a "mild-mannered, slight figure who suffers from liver ailments", Hu, 37, a prominent Chinese dissident who had spent years campaigning for , for the , and on behalf of suffers of before his imprisonment.
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Original:  He was jailed in April 2008 for "inciting to subvert state power" by writing articles about human rights in the period before the .
Revised:  He was imprisoned in April 2008 for "inciting to subvert state power" by writing articles about human rights in the period before the .
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Original:  In 2008 won the (Sakharov Prize for Freedom of Thought) awarded by the EU .
Revised:  In 2008 won the (Sakharov Prize for Freedom of Thought) awarded by the .
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Original: Described by the as a "mild-mannered, slight figure who suffers from liver ailments", the 37-year-old Hu is a prominent Chinese dissident who had spent years campaigning for , for the , and on behalf of suffers of before his imprisonment.
Revised: Described by the as a "mild-mannered, slight figure who suffers from liver ailments", the 37-year-old Hu is a prominent Chinese dissident who had spent years campaigning for , , and on behalf of suffers of before his imprisonment.
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Original: Hu Jia The Chinese government released human rights activist from prison on Sunday after he had served over three years for subversion.
Revised:  The Chinese government released human rights activist from prison on Sunday after he had served over three years for subversion.
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Original:  In 2008 while in prison, he won the for freedom of thought, awarded by the  . Related article 
Revised:  In 2008 while in prison, he won the for freedom of thought, awarded by the . Related articles 
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Original:  This comes amid an EU investigation into claims that US secret agents ran clandestine jails in eastern Europe.
Revised:  This comes amid an EU investigation into claims that the US ran clandestine jails in eastern Europe.
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Original:  According to Human Rights Watch (a civil liberties group) , the secret prisons are located in Poland and Romania.
Revised:  According to Human Rights Watch , the secret prisons are located in Poland and Romania.
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Original:  Speaking at a news conference in Berlin, the EU Justice Commissioner, Franco Frattini called for tough penalties against any involved state, saying "I would be obliged to propose to the Council of EU Ministers serious consequences, including the suspension of voting rights in the council ,".
Revised:  Speaking at a news conference in Berlin, Mr Frattini called for tough penalties against any involved state, saying "I would be obliged to propose to the Council of EU Ministers serious consequences, including the suspension of voting rights in the council ,".
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Original:  Speaking at a news conference in Berlin, the EU Justice Commissioner, Franco Frattini called for tough penalties against any involved state, saying "I would be obliged to propose to the Council of EU Ministers serious consequences, including the suspension of voting rights in the council ,".
Revised:  Speaking at a news conference in Berlin, the EU Justice Commissioner, Franco Frattini called for tough penalties against any involved state, saying "I would be obliged to propose to the Council of EU Ministers serious consequences, including the suspension of voting rights in the council ."
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Original:  The allegations that the CIA held al-Qaeda suspects in secret prisons in Eastern Europe were first reported in the Washington Post on 2 November
Revised:  The allegations that the CIA held al-Qaeda suspects in secret prisons in Eastern Europe were first reported in the Washington Post on November 2
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Original:  The US has declined to confirm or deny the reports of secret jails,  which became public in the US earlier this month.
Revised:  The US has denied the reports of secret jails, which became public in the US earlier this month.
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Original:  The US has declined to confirm or deny the reports of secret jails,  which became public in the US earlier this month.
Revised:  The US has declined to confirm or deny the reports of secret jails, allegations of which became public in the US earlier this month.
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Original:  Chiluba's widow Regina and ex-wife Vera Tembo both attended    
Revised:  Chiluba's widow Regina and ex-wife Vera Tembo both attended . 
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Original: Chiluba led protests that led to then-President agreeing to an election, which Chiluba won in 1991.
Revised: Chiluba led protests that caused then-President agreeing to an election, which Chiluba won in 1991.
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Original: Chiluba led protests that led to then-President agreeing to an election, which Chiluba won in 1991.
Revised: Chiluba led protests that led to then-President to agree to an election, which Chiluba won in 1991.
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Original:  Wallace, not only because it was outside the U.S. (A.L.I.C.E.'s birthday fell on the Thanksgiving day weekend holiday there, so he expected few people would attend a conference in America), but also because of its recently ereceted statue of Alan Turing, who posed the famous A.
Revised:  Wallace, not only because it was outside the U.S. (A.L.I.C.E.'s birthday fell on the Thanksgiving day weekend holiday there, so he expected few people would attend a conference in America), but also because of its recently erected statue of Alan Turing, who posed the famous A.
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Original: I. On hand was the founder the Loebner Prize, an annual Turing Test, designed to pick out the world's most human computer according to an experiment laid out by the famous British Mathematician Alan Turing more then 50 years ago.
Revised: I. On hand was the founder the Loebner Prize, an annual Turing Test, designed to pick out the world's most human computer according to an experiment laid out by the famous British mathematician Alan Turing more then 50 years ago.
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Original:  250px|left The University of Surrey venue was chosen, according to Dr.
Revised:  The University of Surrey venue was chosen, according to Dr.
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Original:  500px Dr. Wallace gave a keynote address outlining the history of A.L.I.C.E. and AIML. Many people commented on the fact the he seemed to have moved around a lot in the last ten years, having lived in New York, Pennsylvania, San Francisco, Maine, Amsterdam and Philadelphia, while working on the Alicebot project.
Revised:  Dr. Wallace gave a keynote address outlining the history of A.L.I.C.E. and AIML. Many people commented on the fact the he seemed to have moved around a lot in the last ten years, having lived in New York, Pennsylvania, San Francisco, Maine, Amsterdam and Philadelphia, while working on the Alicebot project.
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Original:  His answer: memberships, subscriptions, books, directories, syndicated ads, consulting, teaching, and something called the Superbot .
Revised:  His answer: memberships, subscriptions, books, directories, syndicated ads, consulting, teaching, and something called the Superbot .
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Original:  He cited the famous Microsoft paperclip as the most egregius example of a bot the violated all the rules of a good servant's behavior   .
Revised:  He cited the famous Microsoft paperclip as the most egregius example of a bot that violated all the rules of a good servant's behavior .
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Original:  He cited the famous Microsoft paperclip as the most egregius example of a bot the violated all the rules of a good servant's behavior   .
Revised:  He cited the famous Microsoft paperclip as the most egregius example of a bot the violated all the rules of a good servant's behavior . .
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Original:  Wallace gave a keynote address outlining the history of A.L.I.C.E. and  AIML. Many people commented on the fact the he seemed to have moved around a lot in the last ten years, having lived in New York, Pennsylvania, San Francisco, Maine, Amsterdam and Philadelphia, while working on the Alicebot project.
Revised:  Wallace gave a keynote address outlining the history of A.L.I.C.E. and w: AIML. Many people commented on the fact the he seemed to have moved around a lot in the last ten years, having lived in New York, Pennsylvania, San Francisco, Maine, Amsterdam and Philadelphia, while working on the Alicebot project.
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Original:  Wallace gave a keynote address outlining the history of A.L.I.C.E. and w: AIML. Many people commented on the fact the he seemed to have moved around a lot in the last ten years, having lived in New York, Pennsylvania, San Francisco, Maine, Amsterdam and Philadelphia, while working on the Alicebot project.
Revised:  Wallace gave a keynote address outlining the history of A.L.I.C.E. and AIML. Many people commented on the fact the he seemed to have moved around a lot in the last ten years, having lived in New York, Pennsylvania, San Francisco, Maine, Amsterdam and Philadelphia, while working on the Alicebot project.
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Original: 350px|Some attendees pose by the statue of Alan Turing at the University of Surrey in Guildford, UK.
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Original:  250px|left Dr.
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Original:   11 previous clemency petitions have been denied by him.
Revised:  All 11 previous clemency petitions have been denied by him.
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Original:  All previous appeals had been exhausted, leading Lovittto appeal for clemency from the governor 
Revised:  Because of this, Lovitt's sentence has been reduced to life imprisonment without the possibility of parole. 
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Original:  Lingering doubt over Lovitt's guilt a the key factor in Warner's decision.
Revised:  Lingering doubt over Lovitt's guilt was a key factor in Warner's decision.
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Original:  All 11 previous clemency petitions have been denied.
Revised:  All eleven previous clemency petitions have been denied.
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Original:  Warner vhose this petition to be his first, and likely last, granted, noting that clemency should only be used in  "exceptional circumstance.
Revised:  Warner chose this petition to be his first, and likely last, granted, noting that clemency should only be used in "exceptional circumstance.
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Original:  Warner vhose this petition to be his first, and likely last, granted, noting that clemency should only be used in  "exceptional circumstance.
Revised:  Warner vhose this petition to be his first, and likely last, granted, noting that clemency should only be used in an "exceptional circumstance.
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Original:  His defense team, including former Independent Counsel Kenneth Starr, argued  DNA tests could have exonerated Lovitt, but were unable to be performed due to a mistake by a court clerk which resulted in key evidence being thrown away after the trial.
Revised:  His defense team, including former Independent Counsel Kenneth Starr, argued that DNA tests could have exonerated Lovitt, but were unable to be performed due to a mistake by a court clerk which resulted in key evidence being thrown away after the trial.
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Original:  His defense team, including former Independent Counsel Kenneth Starr, argued  DNA tests could have exonerated Lovitt, but were unable to be performed due to a mistake by a court clerk which resulted in key evidence being thrown away after the trial.
Revised:  His defense team, including former Independent Counsel Kenneth Starr, argued DNA tests could have exonerated Lovitt, but weren't performed due to a mistake by a court clerk which resulted in key evidence being thrown away after the trial.
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Original:  Because of this, Lovitt's sentence has been reduced to life imprisonment without the possibility of parole.
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Original:  Due to the commution of Lovitt's sentence, Kenneth Boyd, who is scheduled to be executed in North Carolina on Friday, will  become the 1,000th person executed since 1976
Revised:  Due to the commution of Lovitt's sentence, Kenneth Boyd, who is scheduled to be executed in North Carolina on Friday, will likely become the 1,000th person executed since 1976
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Original: Virginia Governor Mark Warner commuted the death sentence Tuesday to convicted murderer Robin Lovitt, preventing him from becoming the 1,000th person executed in the United States since the Supreme Court reinstated the death penalty in 1976.
Revised: Virginia Governor Mark Warner commuted the death sentence Tuesday of convicted murderer Robin Lovitt, preventing him from becoming the 1,000th person executed in the United States since the Supreme Court reinstated the death penalty in 1976.
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Original: The storm formed 845 mph (1,360 km) east of Bermuda.
Revised: The storm formed 845 miles (1,360 km) east of Bermuda.
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Original:  Storms created after this date will still be included in teh 2005 Atlantic Hurricane Season but it is not officially under the date.
Revised:  Storms created after this date will still be included in the 2005 Atlantic Hurricane Season but it is not officially under the date.
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Original:  The storm is moving west at 8 mph and is expected to continue that movment for 24 hours.
Revised:  The storm is moving west at 8 mph and is expected to continue that movement for 24 hours.
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Original:  Demonstrations held in other Shia areas of the region, including Iraq, Lebanon, Afghanistan, Pakistan, and in India's Kashmir.
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Original: Among those executed was a cleric who criticized both the and that of ;
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Original: Among those executed was cleric , who criticized both the and that of ;
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Original:  Greek prime minister George Papandreou announced a €28 billion cuts policy on Monday;
Revised:  Greek prime minister announced €28 billion cuts policy on Monday;
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Original:  Greek prime minister George Papandreou announced a €28 billion cuts policy on Monday;
Revised:  Greek prime minister George Papandreou announced a €28 billion in cuts Monday;
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Original:  loans worth up to €155 billion from the European Union and International Monetary Fund depend on the measures going through .
Revised:  loans worth up to €155 billion from the European Union and International Monetary Fund depend on the measures going through .
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Original:  loans worth up to €155 billion from the European Union and International Monetary Fund depend on the measures going through .
Revised:  loans worth up to €155 billion from the European Union and International Monetary Fund depend on the measures passing .
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Original:  Tens of thousands of striking workers are planning to march through Athens and five thousand police officers have been brought into the capital to police the march . Most public services in Greece are affected  including hospitals, ambulances, trains, buses, ferries and even air traffic control.
Revised:  Tens of thousands of workers are planning to march through Athens and five thousand police officers have been brought into the capital to police the march . Most public services in Greece are affected including hospitals, ambulances, trains, buses, ferries and even air traffic control.
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Original:  Tens of thousands of striking workers are planning to march through Athens and five thousand police officers have been brought into the capital to police the march . Most public services in Greece are affected  including hospitals, ambulances, trains, buses, ferries and even air traffic control.
Revised:  Tens of thousands of striking workers are planning to march through Athens and five thousand police officers have been brought into the capital to supervise the strike . Most public services in Greece are affected including hospitals, ambulances, trains, buses, ferries and even air traffic control.
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Original:  Tens of thousands of striking workers are planning to march through Athens and five thousand police officers have been brought into the capital to police the march . Most public services in Greece are affected  including hospitals, ambulances, trains, buses, ferries and even air traffic control.
Revised:  Tens of thousands of striking workers are planning to march through Athens and five thousand police officers have been brought into the capital to police the march . Most public services in Greece are affected , including hospitals, ambulances, trains, buses, ferries and even air traffic control.
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