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Original:  Bates characterized this supposed muscular tension as the consequence of a "mental strain" to see, the relief of which he claimed would instantly improve sight.
Revised:  Bates supposed muscular tension as the consequence of a "mental strain" to see, the relief of which he claimed would instantly improve sight.
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Original:   ]   Treatments Bates suggested closing the eyes for minutes at a time to help bring about relaxation.
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Original:   ]   Treatments Bates suggested closing the eyes for minutes at a time to help bring about relaxation.
Revised:  ] progression." Treatments Bates suggested closing the eyes for minutes at a time to help bring about relaxation.
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Original:    If while palming one ends up applying pressure to the eyes, this may increase the risk of glaucoma.
Revised:  Note: If while palming one ends up applying pressure to the eyes, this may increase the risk of glaucoma.
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Original:  Visualization   While Bates preferred to have patients imagine something black, he also reported that some found objects of other colors easiest to visualize, thus were benefited most by remembering those, because, he asserted, "the memory can never be perfect unless it is easy."
Revised:  Visualization , Memory While Bates preferred to have patients imagine something black, he also reported that some found objects of other colors easiest to visualize, thus were benefited most by remembering those, because, he asserted, "the memory can never be perfect unless it is easy."
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Original:  Visualization   While Bates preferred to have patients imagine something black, he also reported that some found objects of other colors easiest to visualize, thus were benefited most by remembering those, because, he asserted, "the memory can never be perfect unless it is easy."
Revised:  Visualization Imagination While Bates preferred to have patients imagine something black, he also reported that some found objects of other colors easiest to visualize, thus were benefited most by remembering those, because, he asserted, "the memory can never be perfect unless it is easy."
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Original:   File:BurningGlass.png|A burning glass being used to focus sunlight on someone's eye, from Perfect Sight Without Glasses.
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Original:   Modern variants "Natural vision correction" or "natural vision improvement" continues to be marketed by practitioners offering individual instruction, many of whom have no medical or optometric credentials . Most base their approach in the Bates method, though some also integrate vision therapy techniques.
Revised:  Modern Bates Method practitioners "Natural vision correction" or "natural vision improvement" continues to be marketed by practitioners offering individual instruction, many of whom have no medical or optometric credentials . Most base their approach in the Bates method, though some also integrate vision therapy techniques.
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Original:  Possible reasons for claimed improvements  General research  General criticisms Dead-end   A frequent criticism of the Bates method is that it has remained relatively obscure , which is seen as proof that it is not truly effective.
Revised:  Skepticism for claimed improvements General research General criticisms Dead-end A frequent criticism of the Bates method is that it has remained relatively obscure , which is seen as proof that it is not truly effective.
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Original:  Possible reasons for claimed improvements  General research  General criticisms Dead-end   A frequent criticism of the Bates method is that it has remained relatively obscure , which is seen as proof that it is not truly effective.
Revised:  Possible reasons for claimed improvements General research General criticisms Dead-end A frequent criticism of the Bates method is that it has remained relatively unknown , which is seen as proof that it is not truly effective.
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Original:   Writer Alan M. MacRobert concluded in a 1979 article that the "most telling argument against the Bates system" and other alternative therapies was that they "bore no fruit".
Revised:  Some studies hypothesize that no type of training has been shown to change the refractive power of the eye and even proport that, certain aspects of the Bates method can put its followers at risk, for example, they might damage their eyes through overexposure to sunlight, not wear their corrective lenses while driving, or neglect conventional eye care, possibly allowing serious conditions to develop. Modern Bates Teachers have a more measured approach when applying the fundamentals of Bates Method and are careful to tell students to limit sunning and always to wear corrective lenses for driving or when safety is of paramount importance. Writer Alan M. MacRobert concluded in a 1979 article that the "most telling argument against the Bates system" and other alternative therapies was that they "bore no fruit".
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Original:  A follower of the Bates method may neglect urgently needed medical treatment for a condition such as glaucoma, which can lead to blindness.
Revised:  An extreme follower of the Bates method may neglect urgently needed medical treatment for a condition such as glaucoma, which can lead to blindness.
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Original:  Eye-care physician William Horatio Bates (1860–1931) attributed nearly all sight problems to habitual "  strain" of the eyes, and thus felt that relieving such "strain" would cure the problems .
Revised:  Eye-care physician William Horatio Bates (1860–1931) attributed nearly all sight problems to habitual " strain" of the eyes, and thus felt that relieving such "strain" would cure defective vision .
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Original:  Bates' main physiological proposition—that the eyeball changes shape to maintain focus—has consistently been contradicted by observation.
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Original:  Nephrogenic DI may be treated by addressing the underlying cause or  the use of a thiazide, aspirin or ibuprofen.
Revised:  Nephrogenic DI may be treated by addressing the underlying cause or by the use of a thiazide, aspirin or ibuprofen.
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Original: Process Performance Qualification Protocol is a component of Process Validation: Process Qualification .
Revised: Process Performance Qualification Protocol is a component of process validation: process qualification .
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Original: Process Performance Qualification Protocol is a component of process validation: process qualification .
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Original: Process Performance Qualification Protocol is a component of process validation: Process Qualification.
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Original: Process performance qualification protocol is a component of process validation: Process Qualification .
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Original:  Process performance qualification protocol is a component of process validation: process qualification.
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Original: H Process performance qualification protocol is a component of process validation: process qualification.
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Original:  He corresponded with various would-be adapters over the years, including Robert Louis Stephenson in 1886 and Jack Grein and Charles Jarvis in the same decade.
Revised:  He corresponded with various would-be adapters over the years, including Robert Louis Stevenson in 1886 and Jack Grein and Charles Jarvis in the same decade.
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Original: Same-gender-loving, or SGL, a term coined for African American use by activist Cleo Manago, is a description for homosexuals and bisexuals , particularly in the African American community.
Revised: Same-gender-loving, or SGL, a term coined for African American use by activist Cleo Manago, is a description for homosexuals and bisexuals in the African American community.
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Original:  It's origin is unknown, though it is most commonly attributed to Black LGBTQ+ people who are active in gender/sexuality discussions across social media. </ref>
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Original:  It 's origin is unknown, though it is most commonly attributed to Black LGBTQ+ people who are active in gender/sexuality discussions across social media.
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Original:  SGL is anti-hate and anti-anti-Black  ]  .
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Original:  SGL is anti-hate and anti-anti-Black  ]  .
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Original:  The National Black Men's Xchange is the oldest and largest US "community-based movement devoted to promoting healthy self-concept and behavior, cultural affirmation and critical consciousness among same-gender loving (SGL), gay-identifying and bisexual African-descended males and allies".
Revised:  National Black Men's Xchange is the oldest and largest US "community-based movement devoted to promoting healthy self-concept and behavior, cultural affirmation and critical consciousness among same-gender loving (SGL), gay-identifying and bisexual African-descended males and allies".
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Original: See Praise (disambiguation) for other uses Praise as Praise vanouds date 11 years old kid Sep 9/2009 praise a rich kid from LA Father 2 richest man in LA came to Belgium to find a good friend Bro James Liam BEST friend for life and also to study the best since school into the word Has 1 brother Praise as a form of social intearichtraction expresses recognition, reassurance, or admiration.
Revised:  Praise as Praise vanouds date 11 years old kid Sep 9/2009 praise a rich kid from LA Father 2 richest man in LA came to Belgium to find a good friend Bro James Liam BEST friend for life and also to study the best since school into the word Has 1 brother Praise as a form of social intearichtraction expresses recognition, reassurance, or admiration.
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Original:  Verbal praise consists of a positive of other people's attributes or actions, where the evaluator assumes the validity of the norms on which the evaluation is based,%DIFDELCMD < [%%% clarification needed 1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% As a form of social manipulation, praise becomes a form of reward and promotes behavioral reinforcement through conditioning.
Revised:  Verbal praise consists of a positive of other people's attributes or actions, where the evaluator assumes the validity of the norms on which the evaluation is based,%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% As a form of social manipulation, praise becomes a form of reward and promotes behavioral reinforcement through conditioning.
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Original:  Verbal praise consists of a positive of other people's attributes or actions, where the evaluator assumes the validity of the norms on which the evaluation is based,%DIFDELCMD < [%%% clarification needed 1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% As a form of social manipulation, praise becomes a form of reward and promotes behavioral reinforcement through conditioning.
Revised:  Verbal praise consists of a positive of other people's attributes or actions, where the evaluator assumes the validity of the norms on which the evaluation is based,%DIFDELCMD < [%%% clarification needed %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% As a form of social manipulation, praise becomes a form of reward and promotes behavioral reinforcement through conditioning.
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Original:   NSF Health Sciences BioPharm International References
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Original: Design Space Verification is defined by the European Medicines Agency as the verification that material inputs and processes are able to scale to commercial manufacturing levels while maintaining a standard of quality.
Revised: Design space verification is defined by the European Medicines Agency as the verification that material inputs and processes are able to scale to commercial manufacturing levels while maintaining a standard of quality.
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Original:  Design space verification is a part of Process Validation as defined by the EMA in conjunction with the FDA.
Revised:  Design space verification is a part of process validation as defined by the EMA in conjunction with the FDA.
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Original:  It should be noted that design space verification is much more focused in scope than overall process validation.
Revised:  Design space verification is much more focused in scope than overall process validation.
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Original: AIDS controversy Malan has generated controversy by repeatedly denying the seriousness and scope of AIDS in Africa.
Revised: AIDS controversy Malan has generated controversy by repeatedly questioning the seriousness and scope of AIDS in Africa.
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Original:  As a journalist, he has written for major newspapers in South Africa, Great Britain and the USA . Personal background Malan grew up in a middle-class and pro-apartheid Afrikaner family in a white suburb of Johannesburg.
Revised:  As a journalist, he has written for major newspapers in South Africa, Britain and the USA . Personal background Malan grew up in a middle-class and pro-apartheid Afrikaner family in a white suburb of Johannesburg.
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Original:  As a journalist, he has written for major newspapers in South Africa, Great Britain and the USA . Personal background Malan grew up in a middle-class and pro-apartheid Afrikaner family in a white suburb of Johannesburg.
Revised:  As a journalist, he has written for major newspapers in South Africa, Great Britain and the United States . Personal background Malan grew up in a middle-class and pro-apartheid Afrikaner family in a white suburb of Johannesburg.
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Original:  To avoid conscription, which was compulsory for all white males (see End Conscription Campaign) , he moved to Los Angeles in 1977 and worked as a journalist.
Revised:  To avoid conscription, which was compulsory for all white males , he moved to Los Angeles in 1977 and worked as a journalist.
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Original:  Since then, he has been a freelance writer for various magazines, mainly in the US (e.g. Esquire, Rolling Stone, The Wall Street Journal), Great Britain (e.g.
Revised:  Since then, he has been a freelance writer for various magazines, mainly in the US (e.g. Esquire, Rolling Stone, The Wall Street Journal), Britain (e.g.
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Original: He has released a CD of his own songs, titled Alien Inboorling (2005: Shifty Music/Sony BMG ).
Revised: He has released a CD of his own songs, titled Alien Inboorling .Alien Inboorling Shifty Music/Sony BMG ).
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Original:  Kevin Drummond (Guitar), Theodora Drummond (accordion), Rian Malan (guitar), Timon Wapenaar (violin), Nippy Cripwell (double URL Malan contributed lyrics to Stoomradio and Opgestook, the first two albums by Afrikaans roots music/boeremusiek band Die Radio Kalahari Orkes and appears on guitar on their second CD, Die Nagloper (2007: Terraplane Entertainment/Sony URL He also contributed lyrics to Say Africa'' by Vusi Mahlasela.
Revised:  Kevin Drummond (Guitar), Theodora Drummond (accordion), Rian Malan (guitar), Timon Wapenaar (violin), Nippy Cripwell (double URL Malan contributed lyrics to Stoomradio and Opgestook, the first two albums by Afrikaans roots music/boeremusiek band Radio Kalahari Orkes and appears on guitar on their second CD, Die Nagloper (2007: Terraplane Entertainment/Sony URL He also contributed lyrics to Say Africa'' by Vusi Mahlasela.
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Original:  Kevin Drummond (Guitar), Theodora Drummond (accordion), Rian Malan (guitar), Timon Wapenaar (violin), Nippy Cripwell (double URL Malan contributed lyrics to Stoomradio and Opgestook, the first two albums by Afrikaans roots music/boeremusiek band Die Radio Kalahari Orkes and appears on guitar on their second CD, Die Nagloper (2007: Terraplane Entertainment/Sony URL He also contributed lyrics to Say Africa'' by Vusi Mahlasela.
Revised:  Kevin Drummond (Guitar), Theodora Drummond (accordion), Rian Malan (guitar), Timon Wapenaar (violin), Nippy Cripwell (double URL Malan contributed lyrics to Stoomradio and Opgestook, the first two albums by Afrikaans roots music/boeremusiek band Die Radio Kalahari Orkes and appears on guitar on their second CD, Die NagloperDie Nagloper, Radio Kalahari Orkes Terraplane Entertainment/Sony URL He also contributed lyrics to Say Africa'' by Vusi Mahlasela.
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Original:  Kevin Drummond (Guitar), Theodora Drummond (accordion), Rian Malan (guitar), Timon Wapenaar (violin), Nippy Cripwell (double URL Malan contributed lyrics to Stoomradio and Opgestook, the first two albums by Afrikaans roots music/boeremusiek band Die Radio Kalahari Orkes and appears on guitar on their second CD, Die Nagloper (2007: Terraplane Entertainment/Sony URL He also contributed lyrics to Say Africa'' by Vusi Mahlasela.
Revised:  Kevin Drummond (Guitar), Theodora Drummond (accordion), Rian Malan (guitar), Timon Wapenaar (violin), Nippy Cripwell (double URL Malan contributed lyrics to Stoomradio and Opgestook, the first two albums by Afrikaans roots music/boeremusiek band Die Radio Kalahari Orkes and appears on guitar on their second CD, Die Nagloper (2007: Terraplane Entertainment/Sony BMG, 2007 He also contributed lyrics to Say Africa'' by Vusi Mahlasela.
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Original:  He then  Woodmead School, South Africa's first non-racially based high school.
Revised:  He then attended Woodmead School, South Africa's first non-racially based high school.
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Original:  however, an ensuing courtcase established that 25 percent of the song's past and future royalties should go to Linda's three daughters.
Revised:  however, an ensuing court case established that 25 percent of the song's past and future royalties should go to Linda's three daughters.
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Original:  URL The Cardiac Electrophysiology Society's founder was George Burch in 1949 and its current president is Jonathan C. Makielski, M.D. Referenc 
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Original:  His father, Dusman Okee Sr. (5 January 2042 - 3 January 2016), is also the father of Norbert Mao.
Revised:  His father, Dusman Okee Sr. (5 January 2042 – 3 January 2016), is also the father of Norbert Mao.
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Original: Daniel Fred Kidega is a former speaker Speaker of the East African Legislative Assembly, in office from December 2014 until June 2017.
Revised: Daniel Fred Kidega is a former Speaker of the East African Legislative Assembly, in office from December 2014 until June 2017.
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Original:  He will serve the remainder of his predecessor's term until June 2017.
Revised:  He served the remainder of his predecessor's term until June 2017.
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Original:  Whaling crews from Labourd  are also referred to as Biscaynes in the north Atlantic (16-18th century).
Revised:  Whaling crews from Labourd in the north Atlantic are also referred to as Biscaynes in the north Atlantic (16-18th century).
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Original:  Whaling crews from Labourd  are also referred to as Biscaynes in the north Atlantic (16-18th century).
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Original:  See also Vizcaíno, the Spanish translation Biscaino, another spelling of the Spanish and Italian translation.
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Original:  For example, the Hebrew prophet Samuel would "lie down and sleep in the temple at Shiloh before the Ark and receive the word of the Lord . "  Most of the dreams in the Bible are in the Book of Genesis.
Revised:  For example, the Hebrew prophet Samuel would "lie down and sleep in the temple at Shiloh before the Ark and receive the word of the Lord " Most of the dreams in the Bible are in the Book of Genesis.
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Original:  For example, the Hebrew prophet Samuel would "lie down and sleep in the temple at Shiloh before the Ark and receive the word of the Lord . "  Most of the dreams in the Bible are in the Book of Genesis.
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Original: File: Antonio de Pereda - El sueño del caballero - Google Art Project .jpg| 300px | The Knight's Dream, 1655, by Antonio de Pereda ]] A dream is a succession of images, ideas, emotions, and sensations that usually occur involuntarily in the mind during certain stages of sleep.
Revised: File: Antonio de Pereda - El sueño del caballero - Google Art Project .jpg| thumb | The Knight's Dream, 1655, by Antonio de Pereda ]] A dream is a succession of images, ideas, emotions, and sensations that usually occur involuntarily in the mind during certain stages of sleep.
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Original:   The content and function of dreams are not fully understood, although they have been a topic of scientific, philosophical and religious interest throughout recorded history.
Revised:  The content and function of dreams have been a topic of scientific, philosophical and religious interest throughout recorded history.
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Original:    Dreams mainly occur in the rapid-eye movement (REM) stage of sleep—when brain activity is high and resembles that of being awake.
Revised:  Dreams mainly occur in the rapid-eye movement (REM) stage of sleep—when brain activity is high and resembles that of being awake.
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Original:  APA Press Cultural meaning Ancient history The Dreaming is a common term within the animist creation narrative of indigenous Australians for a personal, or group, creation and for what may be understood as the "timeless time" of formative creation and perpetual creating.
Revised:  APA Press Ancient history The Dreaming is a common term within the animist creation narrative of indigenous Australians for a personal, or group, creation and for what may be understood as the "timeless time" of formative creation and perpetual creating.
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Original:  London, England: Cambridge University Press. and Mesopotamian kings paid close attention to them . Gudea, the king of the Sumerian city-state of Lagash (reigned 2144–2124 BC ), rebuilt the temple of Ningirsu as the result of a dream in which he was told to do so.
Revised:  London, England: Cambridge University Press. and Mesopotamian kings paid close attention to them . Gudea, the king of the Sumerian city-state of Lagash (reigned 2144–2124 BCE ), rebuilt the temple of Ningirsu as the result of a dream in which he was told to do so.
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Original:  In ancient Egypt, as far back as 2000 BC, [    the Egyptians wrote down their dreams on papyrus.
Revised:  In ancient Egypt, as far back as 2000 BC, [A the Egyptians wrote down their dreams on papyrus.
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