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Original:  On September 2, 1945, with the decision to terminate aid, some of the goods were still in transit and it was necessary for Britain to arrange new loans to finance reconstruction.
Revised:  On 02 September 1945, with the decision to terminate aid, some of the goods were still in transit and it was necessary for Britain to arrange new loans to finance reconstruction.
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Original:  The loan was negotiated at a rate of 2\% interest  , payable over 50 years starting in 1950.
Revised:  The loan was negotiated at a 2\% interest , payable over 50 years starting in 1950.
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Original:  The loan was negotiated at a rate of 2\% interest  , payable over 50 years starting in 1950.
Revised:  The loan was negotiated at a rate of 2\% interest rate , payable over 50 years starting in 1950.
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Original:  The final payment was actually six years late, the British Government having suspended payments due in the years of 1956, 1957, 1964, 1965, 1968 and 1976 because of financial difficulties at those times . Category:Lend Lease Category:World War II Category:BritainCategory:EnglandCategory:United Kingd
Revised:  The final payment was actually six years late, the British Government having suspended payments due in the years 1956, 1957, 1964, 1965, 1968 and 1976 because of financial difficulties at those times . Category:Lend Lease Category:World War II Category:BritainCategory:EnglandCategory:United Kingd
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Original:  The final payment was actually six years late, the British Government having suspended payments due in the years of 1956, 1957, 1964, 1965, 1968 and 1976 because of financial difficulties at those times . Category:Lend Lease Category:World War II Category:BritainCategory:EnglandCategory:United Kingd
Revised:  The final payment was actually six years late, the British Government having suspended payments due in the years of 1956, 1957, 1964, 1965, 1968 and 1976 because of financial difficulties at those times Category:Lend Lease Category:World War II Category:BritainCategory:EnglandCategory:United Kingd
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Original:  The final payment was actually six years late, the British Government having suspended payments due in the years of 1956, 1957, 1964, 1965, 1968 and 1976 because of financial difficulties at those times . Category:Lend Lease Category:World War II Category:BritainCategory:EnglandCategory:United Kingd
Revised:  The final payment was actually six years late, the British Government having suspended payments due in the years of 1956, 1957, 1964, 1965, 1968 and 1976 because of financial difficulties at those times . 
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Original: Great Britain  paid off the last of the loans it received to rebuild the country after World War II, sixty years ago.
Revised: Great Britain has paid off the last of the loans it received to rebuild the country after World War II, sixty years ago.
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Original:  On 02 September 1945, with the decision to terminate aid, some of the goods were still in transit and it was necessary for Britain to arrange new loans to finance reconstruction.
Revised:  On 2nd September 1945, with the decision to terminate aid, some of the goods were still in transit and it was necessary for Britain to arrange new loans to finance reconstruction.
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Original:  More than 75 radar-dark patches or lakes were seen, ranging from 3 kilometers (1.8 miles) to more than 70 kilometers (43 miles) across. ome lakes appear partly dry, while others seem liquid-filled.
Revised:  More than 75 radar-dark patches or lakes were seen, ranging from 3 kilometers (1.8 miles) to more than 70 kilometers (43 miles) across. Some lakes appear partly dry, while others seem liquid-filled.
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Original: Cassini will be performing at least 22 more flyby's of Titan.
Revised: Cassini will be performing at least 22 more flybys of Titan.
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Original: Yesterday, the Coptic Orthodox Church in Egypt selected the 60-year-old Bishop Tawadros from Beheira in the Nile Delta as the new leader of the church in a ceremony held at in .
Revised: Yesterday, the in selected the 60-year-old Bishop Tawadros from Beheira in the Nile Delta as the new leader of the church in a ceremony held at in .
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Original:  The election process follows the death in March of the previous Pope, Shenuda III .
Revised:  The election process follows the death in March of the previous leader, .
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Original: The Coptic Orthodox Church represents between 6\% and 10\% of Egypt's population of 83 million  and is the largest Christian community in the .
Revised: The Coptic Orthodox Church represents six to ten percent of the 83 million and is the largest Christian community in the .
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Original:  Figures released today show that the amount of organs donated by New Zealanders in 2006 have decreased by four to the new record low amount of 25.
Revised:  Figures released today show that the number of organs donated by New Zealanders in 2006 have decreased by four to the new record low amount of 25.
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Original:  Figures released today show that the amount of organs donated by New Zealanders in 2006 have decreased by four to the new record low amount of 25.
Revised:  Figures released today show that the amount of organs donated by New Zealanders in 2006 has decreased by four to the new record low amount of 25.
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Original:  Figures released today show that the amount of organs donated by New Zealanders in 2006 have decreased by four to the new record low amount of 25.
Revised:  Figures released today show that the amount of organs donated by New Zealanders in 2006 have decreased by four to the new record low of 25.
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Original:  In 2005 the amount of organs donated equalled 29, a previous record low amount in New Zealand.
Revised:  In 2005 the number of organs donated equalled 29, a previous record low amount in New Zealand.
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Original:  In 2005 the amount of organs donated equalled 29, a previous record low amount in New Zealand.
Revised:  In 2005 the amount of organs donated equalled 29, a previous record low in New Zealand.
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Original:  Before 2005 the amount of organ donations averaged 40, low compared to the international standards.
Revised:  Before 2005 the number of organ donations averaged 40, low compared to the international standards.
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Original:  Before 2005 the amount of organ donations averaged 40, low compared to the international standards.
Revised:  Before 2005 the amount of organ donations averaged 40, an already low number by international standards.
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Original:  GiveLife said that the main reason for the low donor number could be because of the low road toll and the better healthcare.
Revised:  GiveLife suggested that the main reason for the low donor number could be because of the low road toll and the better healthcare.
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Original:  GiveLife said that the main reason for the low donor number could be because of the low road toll and the better healthcare.
Revised:  GiveLife said that the main reason for the lack of donors could be the low road toll and the better healthcare.
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Original:  Doctor Jackie Blue, National member of Parliament, has partnered with Mr Tookey and  have proposed a change to the current law and is against the current law change proposal by the government, which he claims will give more power to reduce the donor rate.
Revised:  Doctor Jackie Blue, National member of Parliament, has partnered with Mr Tookey and together they have proposed a change to the current law and is against the current law change proposal by the government, which he claims will give more power to reduce the donor rate.
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Original:  Figures released today show that the number of organs donated by New Zealanders in 2006 has decreased by four to the new record low of 25.
Revised:  Figures released today show that the number of organs donated by New Zealanders in 2006 has decreased by four to a new record low of 25.
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Original:  Mr Tookey said that the government's proposal gives the power of other people to "veto your wish to be a donor."
Revised:  Mr Tookey said that the government's proposal bestows power upon others to "veto your wish to be a donor."
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Original:  New Zealand is in between Iceland and Mexico for the amount of organs donated.
Revised:  New Zealand is in between Iceland and Mexico for the numbers of organs donated.
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Original:  Spain, America and the United Kingdom are the top three countries for donating organs with 25 donors per million population, 21 donors and 10.7 donors respectively
Revised:  Spain, the United States, and the United Kingdom are the top three countries for donating organs with 25 donors per million population, 21 donors and 10.7 donors respectively
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Original:  Spain, America and the United Kingdom are the top three countries for donating organs with 25 donors per million population, 21 donors and 10.7 donors respectively
Revised:  Spain, America and the United Kingdom top the table, with 25 donors per million population, 21 donors and 10.7 donors respectively
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Original: Andy Tookey, campaigner for GiveLife New Zealand, said: "It is important not to lose donors through families overriding donors  wishes or the doctors not asking families in the first place."
Revised: Andy Tookey, campaigner for GiveLife New Zealand, said: "It is important not to lose donors through families overriding donors ' wishes or the doctors not asking families in the first place."
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Original:  In the Intensive Care Units an audit showed that there were a possible of 104 donors and only 69 of those families were asked if the organs could be donated.
Revised:  In the Intensive Care Units an audit showed that there was a possibility of 104 donors and only 69 of those families were asked if the organs could be donated.
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Original:  His dependence on the drug was first made public when he was hospitalized in 1981 for symptoms related to the drug, but the extent of his delusions were only revealed in the release of the file this week.
Revised:  His dependence on the drug was first made public when he was hospitalized in 1981 for symptoms related to the drug, but the delusions were only revealed in the release of the file this week.
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Original: The late head of the U.S.'s top court began taking the drug Placidyl in the early 1970s for insomnia  back pain while he was an associate supreme court justice.
Revised: The late head of the U.S.'s top court began taking the drug Placidyl in the early 1970s for insomnia and back pain while he was an associate supreme court justice.
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Original: Former U.S. Chief Justice William Rehnquist suffered paranoid delusions in 1981 during withdrawal from a dependence on prescription painkillers, according to his recently-released FBI file.
Revised: Former U.S. Chief Justice suffered paranoid delusions in 1981 during withdrawal from a dependence on prescription painkillers, according to his recently-released FBI file.
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Original:  The deputy secretary and I repeatedly have stressed to NNSA and laboratory management the importance of these issues being addressed, rectified and prevented in the future.
Revised: " The deputy secretary and I repeatedly have stressed to NNSA and laboratory management the importance of these issues being addressed, rectified and prevented in the future.
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Original:  While I believe that the current NNSA management has done its best to address these concerns, I do not believe that progress in correcting these issues has been adequate. 
Revised:  While I believe that the current NNSA management has done its best to address these concerns, I do not believe that progress in correcting these issues has been adequate. "
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Original: The head of the nuclear security agency, Linton Brooks, has been forced to resign due to security issues.
Revised: The head of America's nuclear security agency, Linton Brooks, has been forced to resign due to security issues.
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Original:   Secretary of Energy, Samuel Bodman asked for Brooks' resignation because of issues including "serious security breaches" in several labratories, including the Los Alamos National Labratory.
Revised:  United States Secretary of Energy, Samuel Bodman asked for Brooks' resignation because of issues including "serious security breaches" in several labratories, including the Los Alamos National Labratory.
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Original:  United States Secretary of Energy, Samuel Bodman asked for Brooks' resignation because of issues including "serious security breaches" in several labratories, including the Los Alamos National Labratory . Brooks issued a statement to President Bush, and NNSA (National Nuclear Security Agency ) employees, saying that he would resign "shortly"
Revised:  United States Secretary of Energy, Samuel Bodman asked for Brooks' resignation because of issues including "serious security breaches" in several labratories, including the Los Alamos National Laboratory . Brooks issued a statement to President Bush, and NNSA (National Nuclear Security Agency ) employees, saying that he would resign "shortly"
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Original:  United States Secretary of Energy, Samuel Bodman asked for Brooks' resignation because of issues including "serious security breaches" in several labratories, including the Los Alamos National Labratory . Brooks issued a statement to President Bush, and NNSA (National Nuclear Security Agency ) employees, saying that he would resign "shortly"
Revised:  United States Secretary of Energy, Samuel Bodman asked for Brooks' resignation because of issues including "serious security breaches" in several labratories, including the Los Alamos National Labratory . Brooks issued a statement to President Bush, and NNSA (National Nuclear Security Administration ) employees, saying that he would resign "shortly"
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Original:  United States Secretary of Energy, Samuel Bodman asked for Brooks' resignation because of issues including "serious security breaches" in several labratories , including the Los Alamos National Laboratory.
Revised:  United States Secretary of Energy, Samuel Bodman asked for Brooks' resignation because of issues including "serious security breaches" in several laboratories , including the Los Alamos National Laboratory.
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Original: Egypt intends to launch an international initiative to fight Internet terrorism .
Revised: Egypt intends to launch an international initiative to fight misuse of the internet .
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Original:  The idea lies in implementing a long-term international cooperation plan that concerns suppressing the activity of criminals and terrorist groups that use World Wide Web for promoting aggressive and fundamentalist ideas . Abdel Aziz Seif el-Nasr stated that soon Egypt will take necessary steps to present the idea on the international arena.
Revised:  The idea lies in implementing a long-term international cooperation plan that concerns suppressing the activity of criminals and other groups that use World Wide Web for promoting aggressive and fundamentalist ideas . Abdel Aziz Seif el-Nasr stated that soon Egypt will take necessary steps to present the idea on the international arena.
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Original:  The idea lies in implementing a long-term international cooperation plan that concerns suppressing the activity of criminals and terrorist groups that use World Wide Web for promoting aggressive and fundamentalist ideas . Abdel Aziz Seif el-Nasr stated that soon Egypt will take necessary steps to present the idea on the international arena.
Revised:  The idea lies in implementing a long-term international cooperation plan that concerns suppressing the activity of criminals and terrorist groups that use World Wide Web for promoting their interests . Abdel Aziz Seif el-Nasr stated that soon Egypt will take necessary steps to present the idea on the international arena.
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Original:  He also outlined the fact that the plan for fighting cyber-terrorism stipulates the introduction of new rules for Internet users .
Revised:  He also outlined the fact that the plan for fighting cyber-terrorism stipulates the introduction of new rules for Internet users 
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Original:  The parents, who which to remain anonymous, explain their situation on a blog entitled The " Ahsley Treatment".
Revised:  The parents, who which to remain anonymous, explain their situation on a blog entitled The " Ashley Treatment".
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Original: -Ashley’s Mom and Dad Ashley's parents want to keep her at home and care for her themselves, and they want to garuantee their daughter's quality of life.
Revised: -Ashley’s Mom and Dad Ashley's parents want to keep her at home and care for her themselves, and they want to guarantee their daughter's quality of life.
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Original:  To attenuate her growth, Ahsley was given high doses of the hormone estrogen.
Revised:  To attenuate her growth, Ashley was given high doses of the hormone estrogen.
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Original:  Since high estrogen levels can cause mentrual bleeding and breast development, the surgery was also meant to limited these effects.
Revised:  Since high estrogen levels can cause menstrual bleeding and breast development, the surgery was also meant to limited these effects.
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Original:  Ashley in her weelchair in 2006.
Revised:  Ashley in her wheelchair in 2006.
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Original:  He rejects the arguement of interfering with nature too much, since it is not uncommon practice to treat girls who grow taller than what is normally accepted with estrogens.
Revised:  He rejects the argument of interfering with nature too much, since it is not uncommon practice to treat girls who grow taller than what is normally accepted with estrogens.
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Original:  He argues that a small gesture alone might induce some intuitive ethical concern, but that shouldn't stop us "if we truly believe that the worth of a person goes deeper than his or her physical appearance." Dr. Brosco also draws attention to a broader social context, indicating that the burder for the family is higher in a society that fails to provide adequate support.
Revised:  He argues that a small gesture alone might induce some intuitive ethical concern, but that shouldn't stop us "if we truly believe that the worth of a person goes deeper than his or her physical appearance." Dr. Brosco also draws attention to a broader social context, indicating that the burden for the family is higher in a society that fails to provide adequate support.
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Original:  The parents, who which to remain anonymous, explain their situation on a blog entitled The "Ashley Treatment".
Revised:  The parents, who wish to remain anonymous, explain their situation on a blog entitled The "Ashley Treatment".
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Original:  Since high estrogen levels can cause menstrual bleeding and breast development, the surgery was also meant to limited these effects.
Revised:  Since high estrogen levels can cause menstrual bleeding and breast development, the surgery was also meant to limit these effects.
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Original: In bioethical issues, were benefits and risks are weighed, "do no harm" is one of the governing principle for doctors, who swear it in the Hippocratic oath.
Revised: In bioethical issues, where benefits and risks are weighed, "do no harm" is one of the governing principle for doctors, who swear it in the Hippocratic oath.
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Original:  In the case report discussion, the physicians recognise that surgical removal of the uterus in disabled girls "is controversial and invariably associated with the negative connotations and history of forced 'sterilization.
Revised:  In the case report discussion, the physicians recognize that surgical removal of the uterus in disabled girls "is controversial and invariably associated with the negative connotations and history of forced 'sterilization.
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Original:  The Canadian team held a perfect 6-0-0 record for the third strait year.
Revised:  The Canadian team held a perfect 6-0-0 record for the third straight year.
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Original: For the third time in a row, Team Canada has won the gold medal at the IIHF World Junior Hockey Championship , this yearplayed in Leksand, Sweden.
Revised: For the third time in a row, Team Canada has won the gold medal at the IIHF World Junior Hockey Championship . This year's tournament took place in Leksand, Sweden.
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Original:  This is the third year in a row that Canada and the Russians have met in the Gold medal game.
Revised:  This is the third year in a row that Canada and the Russians have met in the gold medal game.
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Original:  It's unbelievable", and that " "I'm so proud of these kids.
Revised:  It's unbelievable", and that "I'm so proud of these kids.
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Original:  As of writing there are two reports of fatalities.
Revised:  There are two known fatalities.
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Original:  In South Carolina, a possible tornado piled up cars, injuring 15  by an elementary school.
Revised:  In South Carolina, a tornado piled up cars, injuring 15 by an elementary school.
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Original:  In South Carolina, a possible tornado piled up cars, injuring 15  by an elementary school.
Revised:  In South Carolina, a possible tornado piled up cars, injuring 15 , by an elementary school.
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Original:  In Mississippi, 9 people were injured with "8 to 10 homes destroyed,"  Ben Dudley, Kemper County's emergency management director , told CNN . In Louisiana, had the worst damage (especially around Iberia Parish) with a tornado touching down.
Revised:  In Mississippi, 9 people were injured with "8 to 10 homes destroyed," said Ben Dudley, Kemper County's emergency management director , told CNN . In Louisiana, had the worst damage (especially around Iberia Parish) with a tornado touching down.
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Original:  In Mississippi, 9 people were injured with "8 to 10 homes destroyed,"  Ben Dudley, Kemper County's emergency management director , told CNN . In Louisiana, had the worst damage (especially around Iberia Parish) with a tornado touching down.
Revised:  In Mississippi, 9 people were injured with "8 to 10 homes destroyed," Ben Dudley, Kemper County's emergency management director . In Louisiana, had the worst damage (especially around Iberia Parish) with a tornado touching down.
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Original:  In Mississippi, 9 people were injured with "8 to 10 homes destroyed,"  Ben Dudley, Kemper County's emergency management director , told CNN . In Louisiana, had the worst damage (especially around Iberia Parish) with a tornado touching down.
Revised:  In Mississippi, 9 people were injured with "8 to 10 homes destroyed," Ben Dudley, Kemper County's emergency management director , told CNN . Lousiana had the worst damage (especially around Iberia Parish) with a tornado touching down.
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Original: Auckland Harbour Bridge  where the promotional event occurred.
Revised: Auckland Harbour Bridge , where the promotional event occurred.
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Original: Mr Reid preformed the record on the clipon lanes of the bridge which were close at Christmas because the lanes had to be resurfaced.
Revised: Mr Reid preformed the record on the clipon lanes of the bridge which were closed at Christmas because the lanes had to be resurfaced.
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Original: Mr Reid preformed the record on the clipon lanes of the bridge which were close at Christmas because the lanes had to be resurfaced.
Revised: Mr Reid preformed the record on the clipon lanes of the bridge which were close at Christmas because the lanes were being resurfaced.
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