wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  In conjunction with the announcement the FDA announced a new website URL that urges cancer patients to discuss all treatments they consider trying with their physicians and gives advice about spotting and reporting false health claims .
Revised:  In conjunction with the announcement the FDA announced a new website URL that urges cancer patients to discuss all treatments they consider trying with their physicians and gives advice about spotting and reporting false health claims 
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Original:  They are steelmaker Krakatau Steel, Bank Tabungan Negara (BTN) and national flag carrier Garuda Indonesia   
Revised:  They are steelmaker Krakatau Steel, Bank Tabungan Negara (BTN) and national flag carrier Garuda Indonesia . 
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Original:  Krakatau will use the funds to help finance an expansion scheme which aims to have production doubled to five million tonnes in 2011 
Revised:  Krakatau will use the funds to help finance an expansion scheme which aims to have production doubled to five million tonnes in 2011. 
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Original:  BTN hopes to conduct its IPO before the end of 2008 
Revised:  BTN hopes to conduct its IPO before the end of 2008. 
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Original:  Garuda expects to raise RP4.2 trillion in funds from the IPO, and will use RP2.5 trillion to pay off its debts and invest RP1.7 trillion in new aircraft  
Revised:  Garuda expects to raise RP4.2 trillion in funds from the IPO, and will use RP2.5 trillion to pay off its debts and invest RP1.7 trillion in new aircraft . 
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Original: Krakatau expects 3.2 trillion Rupiah  from the sale, while the estimated price for their stock is between RP3 and RP4 trillion.
Revised: Krakatau expects 3.2 trillion Rupiah from the sale, while the estimated price for their stock is between IDR3 and IDR4 trillion.
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Original:  BTN, which focuses on homeowner loans, has set itself a target income of RP36 .12 trillion in 2010 compared to a projected RP22 .9 trillion this year.
Revised:  BTN, which focuses on home owner loans, has set itself a target income of RP36 .12 trillion in 2010 compared to a projected RP22 .9 trillion this year.
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Original:  BTN, which focuses on homeowner loans, has set itself a target income of RP36 .12 trillion in 2010 compared to a projected RP22 .9 trillion this year.
Revised:  BTN, which focuses on homeowner loans, has set itself a target income of IDR36 .12 trillion in 2010 compared to a projected RP22 .9 trillion this year.
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Original:  BTN, which focuses on homeowner loans, has set itself a target income of RP36 .12 trillion in 2010 compared to a projected RP22 .9 trillion this year.
Revised:  BTN, which focuses on homeowner loans, has set itself a target income of RP36 .12 trillion in 2010 compared to a projected IDR22 .9 trillion this year.
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Original:  Net profit for this year is projected at RP472 billion and is hoped to rise to RP1 .39 trillion in 2010.
Revised:  Net profit for this year is projected at IDR472 billion and is hoped to rise to RP1 .39 trillion in 2010.
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Original:  Net profit for this year is projected at RP472 billion and is hoped to rise to RP1 .39 trillion in 2010.
Revised:  Net profit for this year is projected at RP472 billion and is hoped to rise to IDR1 .39 trillion in 2010.
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Original:  Garuda expects to raise RP4 .2 trillion in funds from the IPO, and will use RP2 .5 trillion to pay off its debts and invest RP1 .7 trillion in new aircraft.
Revised:  Garuda expects to raise IDR4 .2 trillion in funds from the IPO, and will use RP2 .5 trillion to pay off its debts and invest RP1 .7 trillion in new aircraft.
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Original:  Garuda expects to raise RP4 .2 trillion in funds from the IPO, and will use RP2 .5 trillion to pay off its debts and invest RP1 .7 trillion in new aircraft.
Revised:  Garuda expects to raise RP4 .2 trillion in funds from the IPO, and will use IDR2 .5 trillion to pay off its debts and invest RP1 .7 trillion in new aircraft.
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Original:  Garuda expects to raise RP4 .2 trillion in funds from the IPO, and will use RP2 .5 trillion to pay off its debts and invest RP1 .7 trillion in new aircraft.
Revised:  Garuda expects to raise RP4 .2 trillion in funds from the IPO, and will use RP2 .5 trillion to pay off its debts and invest IDR1 .7 trillion in new aircraft.
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Original: Fifteen people are dead  and thirty more have become ill after attempting to steal fuel from a freight train travelling through Karbi Anglong, Assam, India.
Revised: Fifteen people are dead , and thirty more have become ill after attempting to steal fuel from a freight train travelling through Karbi Anglong, Assam, India.
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Original:  The train was in a forested area at the time and was sorounded by armed men, a common occurence in an area where trains transporting products to and from refineries are regularly targeted.
Revised:  The train was in a forested area at the time and was surrounded by armed men, a common occurence in an area where trains transporting products to and from refineries are regularly targeted.
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Original:  The train was in a forested area at the time and was sorounded by armed men, a common occurence in an area where trains transporting products to and from refineries are regularly targeted.
Revised:  The train was in a forested area at the time and was sorounded by armed men, a common occurrence in an area where trains transporting products to and from refineries are regularly targeted.
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Original:  There are no reports as in to what the tank contained, but the fumes are toxic.
Revised:  There are no reports as in to what the tank contained, but the fumes were toxic;
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Original:  When police arrived they found that fifteen had succumbed to the gas, and thirty more were sickened by it.
Revised:  when police arrived they found that fifteen had succumbed to the gas, and thirty more were sickened by it.
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Original: The United Nations has called for wealthy doner nations to donate US$700 million (£382 million or EUR484 million) in emergency aid for Eastern Africa to prevent widespread famine.
Revised: The United Nations has called for wealthy donor nations to donate US$700 million (£382 million or EUR484 million) in emergency aid for Eastern Africa to prevent widespread famine.
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Original:  He says Ethiopia and Somalia are in the worst states, with 6 million Ethiopians requiring emergency support and 43\% of Somalia's population in a similar predicament.
Revised:  He says Ethiopia and Somalia are in the worst states, with six million Ethiopians requiring emergency support and 43\% of Somalia's population in a similar predicament.
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Original:  This contradicts earlier eyewitness statements which say one engine was aflame when the Boeing 737 crashed  
Revised:  This contradicts earlier eyewitness statements which say one engine was aflame when the Boeing 737 crashed . 
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Original:  Instead, the investigation focus has shifted to some unusual movements that Air Traffic Control records indicste were made by the pilot   
Revised:  Instead, the investigation focus has shifted to some unusual movements that Air Traffic Control records indicate were made by the pilot 
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Original:  Instead, the investigation focus has shifted to some unusual movements that Air Traffic Control records indicste were made by the pilot   
Revised:  Instead, the investigation focus has shifted to some unusual movements that Air Traffic Control records indicste were made by the pilot . 
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Original:  It is hoped they will provide an insight as in to what the crew were up to during the flight's final moments  
Revised:  It is hoped they will provide an insight as in to what the crew were up to during the flight's final moments . 
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Original: Efforts are continueing to analyse the Cockpit Voice Recorder and Flight Data Recorder, which were heavily damaged by a post-crash fire.
Revised: Efforts are continuing to analyse the Cockpit Voice Recorder and Flight Data Recorder, which were heavily damaged by a post-crash fire.
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Original:  This contradicts earlier eyewitness statements which say one engine was aflame when the Boeing 737 crashed.
Revised:  This contradicts earlier eyewitness statements which say one engine was aflame when the crashed.
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Original:  Russia's Interstate Aviation Committee (MAK) says the CFM International CFM56 engines kept operating up until impact.
Revised:  Russia's Interstate Aviation Committee (MAK) says the engines kept operating up until impact.
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Original:  Instead, the investigation focus has shifted to some unusual movements that Air Traffic Control records indicate were made by the pilot.
Revised:  Instead, the investigation focus has shifted to some unusual movements that records indicate were made by the pilot.
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Original:  After executing a missed approach procedure, the 737-500 then turned in the wrong direction before crashing.
Revised:  After executing a procedure, the 737-500 then turned in the wrong direction before crashing.
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Original:  Efforts are continuing to analyse the Cockpit Voice Recorder and Flight Data Recorder , which were heavily damaged by a post-crash fire.
Revised:  Efforts are continuing to analyse the and , which were heavily damaged by a post-crash fire.
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Original:  He was just months fromcompleting his full term of office, but is caught up in allegations that he influenced a corruption case being brought against rival and ANC leader Jaco Zuma   
Revised:  He was just months fromcompleting his full term of office, but is caught up in allegations that he influenced a corruption case being brought against rival and ANC leader Jaco Zuma . 
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Original:  He has called a special government meeting tomorrow to decide how to continue with his removal  
Revised:  He has called a special government meeting tomorrow to decide how to continue with his removal . 
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Original: Despite the strong 'no' votes in both France and the Netherlands, the Irish foreign minister Dermot Ahern has confirmed that Ireland will still hold a referendum on the proposed EU constitution.
Revised: Despite the strong 'no' votes in both France and the Netherlands, the Irish foreign minister Dermot Ahern has confirmed that Ireland will still hold a referendum on the proposed European Union constitution.
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Original:  This comes as somewhat of a surprise as not only did Ireland reject the Nice Treaty in 2002, but many other countries such as Britain appear certain to drop the constitution claiming it is now dead.
Revised:  This comes following the Irish rejection of the Nice Treaty in 2002, but many other countries such as Britain appear certain to drop the constitution claiming it is now dead.
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Original:  This comes as somewhat of a surprise as not only did Ireland reject the Nice Treaty in 2002, but many other countries such as Britain appear certain to drop the constitution claiming it is now dead.
Revised:  This comes as somewhat of a surprise as not only did Ireland reject the Nice Treaty in 2002.
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Original:  What do you say to those people: 'Your votes mean nothing'?" (note that the only country where the constitution was directly ratified by the "population " and not by the parliament  is Spain).
Revised:  What do you say to those people: 'Your votes mean nothing'?" (note that the only country where the constitution was directly ratified by the population and not by the parliament is Spain).
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Original:  I'm Kevin Fields, and here is this evenings 's current stories.
Revised:  I'm Kevin Fields, and here is this evening 's current stories.
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Original:  It was posted on his blog along with a reply that mocked Adam Kluger and brought ridicule and criticism against Adam Kugler and his agency.
Revised:  It was posted on his blog along with a reply that mocked Kluger and brought ridicule and criticism against Adam Kugler and his agency.
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Original:  Kugler and his PR team have come forward defending the advertising techniques, stating that they do not have songs made just for the products in question and do not infringe on artistic integrity.
Revised:  Kluger and his PR team have come forward defending the advertising techniques, stating that they do not have songs made just for the products in question and do not infringe on artistic integrity.
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Original:  Jeff Crouse.
Revised: September 22, 2008 UPDATE: (A representative from Adam Kluger Public Relations in New York City adamklugerpr-dot-com contacted wired.com to say that there should also be no confusion over the fact that their New York City based PR Firm, founded by a former television producer (CNN, FOX), also coincidentally named Adam Kluger, is not involved in this issue in any way and should not be confused with the Adam Kluger quoted above in this article.) Jeff Crouse.
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Original:  The website also advertises that "a successful 'brand-dropping' campaign will imprint [the] brand name and product into your market's subconscious"    
Revised:  The website also advertises that "a successful 'brand-dropping' campaign will imprint [the] brand name and product into your market's subconscious" . 
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Original:  According to Crouse, Kluger emailed him once again to claim it had been an automated email, and later requested that Crouse remove the the post and comments criticizing himself and his agency, threatening a $150,000 lawsuit against Crouse for defamation.
Revised:  According to Crouse, Kluger emailed him once again to claim it had been an automated email, and later requested that Crouse remove the the post and comments criticizing himself and his agency, threatening a lawsuit against Crouse for defamation.
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Original:  The website also advertises that "a successful 'brand-dropping' campaign will imprint [the] brand name and product into your market's subconscious"  
Revised:  The website also advertises that "a successful 'brand-dropping' campaign will imprint [the] brand name and product into your market's subconscious" . 
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Original:  According to Crouse, Kluger emailed him once again to claim it had been an automated email, and later requested that Crouse remove the the post and comments criticizing himself and his agency, threatening a lawsuit against Crouse for defamation.
Revised:  According to Crouse, Kluger emailed him once again to claim it had been an automated email, and later requested that Crouse remove the post and comments criticizing himself and his agency, threatening a lawsuit against Crouse for defamation.
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Original:  Kluger Agency is known for advertising brands like Abercrombie & Fitch, Mercedez-Benz , and Nike by inserting the brand names in the songs of popular artists like Mariah Carey, Black Eyed Peas, Fall Out Boy, Pink, Lady GaGa and Ludacris.
Revised:  Kluger Agency is known for advertising brands like Abercrombie & Fitch, Mercedes-Benz , and Nike by inserting the brand names in the songs of popular artists like Mariah Carey, Black Eyed Peas, Fall Out Boy, Pink, Lady GaGa and Ludacris.
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Original:  According to Crouse, Kluger emailed him once again to claim it had been an automated email, and later requested that Crouse remove the  post and comments criticizing himself and his agency, threatening a  lawsuit against Crouse for defamation.
Revised:  According to Crouse, Kluger emailed him once again to claim it had been an automated email, and later requested that Crouse remove the the post and comments criticizing himself and his agency, threatening a lawsuit against Crouse for defamation.
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Original:  The website also advertises that "a successful 'brand-dropping' campaign will imprint [the] brand name and product into your market's subconscious" . UPDATE
Revised:  The website also advertises that "a successful 'brand-dropping' campaign will imprint [the] brand name and product into your market's subconscious" UPDATE
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Original:  The website also advertises that "a successful 'brand-dropping' campaign will imprint [the] brand name and product into your market's subconscious" . UPDATE
Revised:  The website also advertises that "a successful 'brand-dropping' campaign will imprint [the] brand name and product into your market's subconscious" . 
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Original: Police referred themselves to PIRC John McNeill, who said "My investigation found [...] there was potential to stop and breathalyse the person thereby preventing a later serious road accident."
Revised: Police referred themselves to PIRC John McNeill, who said "My investigation found [...] there was potential to stop and the person thereby preventing a later serious road accident."
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Original:  "The worst is yet to come," said Benudhar Dash, Additional Relief Commissioner, Orissa  
Revised:  "The worst is yet to come," said Benudhar Dash, Additional Relief Commissioner, Orissa . 
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Original:  The new flooding comes just a few weeks after Kosi river that flows from Nepal to India, burst its banks and submerged nearly 1,000 villages in the neighboring state of Bihar, killing at least 48 people and driving more than a million others from their homes.
Revised:  The new flooding comes just weeks after Kosi river that flows from Nepal to India, burst its banks and submerged nearly 1,000 villages in the neighboring state of Bihar, killing at least 48 people and driving more than a million others from their homes.
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Original:  The flood, described as the worst-ever since 1982 by officials, has marooned 191 villages.
Revised:  The flood, described as the worst since 1982 by officials, has marooned 191 villages.
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Original:  All major state rivers and their tributaries were flowing above the danger level due to the heavy monsoon rains.
Revised:  All major state rivers and their tributaries are flowing above the danger level due to the heavy monsoon rains.
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Original:  "The worst is yet to come," said Benudhar Dash, Additional Relief Commissioner , Orissa.
Revised:  "The worst is yet to come," said Benudhar Dash, Additional Relief Commissioner of Orissa.
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Original:  Over 180,000 people are evacuated to safer places, while hundreds of others have taken shelter on national highway and cyclone shelters.
Revised:  Over 180,000 people have been evacuated to safer places, while hundreds of others have taken shelter on national highway and cyclone shelters.
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Original:  The flight on which he he stowed away originated in Johannesburg, South Africa and made one stopover in Dakar, Senega
Revised:  The flight on which he he stowed away originated in Johannesburg, South Africa and made one stopover in Dakar, Senegal
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Original: EliteXC Lightheavyweight champion K.J. Noons was stripped of the title on Friday by EliteXC officials for failure to defend the title.
Revised: EliteXC Lightyweight champion K.J. Noons was stripped of the title on Friday by EliteXC officials for failure to defend the title.
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Original:  Outlined in a press release, EliteXC Head of Fight Operations, Jeremy Lappen stated that Noons turned down two opportunities to defend the title against top contender Nick Diaz. K.J. Noons won the EliteXC Lightheavyweight Championship on November 10, 2007 after the fight was stopped in the first round due to a cut over the eye of then-champion Nick Diaz.
Revised:  Outlined in a press release, EliteXC Head of Fight Operations, Jeremy Lappen stated that Noons turned down two opportunities to defend the title against top contender Nick Diaz. K.J. Noons won the EliteXC Lightweight Championship on November 10, 2007 after the fight was stopped in the first round due to a cut over the eye of then-champion Nick Diaz.
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Original:  EliteXC is expected to announce a fight for the vacant Lightheavyweight title in the near future
Revised:  EliteXC is expected to announce a fight for the vacant Lightweight title in the near future
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Original: EliteXC Lightyweight champion K.J. Noons was stripped of the title on Friday by EliteXC officials for failure to defend the title.
Revised: EliteXC Lightweight champion K.J. Noons was stripped of the title on Friday by EliteXC officials for failure to defend the title.
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Original: Large Hadron Collider (LHC) at CERN in Geneva has suffered a critical damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.
Revised: Large Hadron Collider (LHC) in CERN, Geneva has suffered a critical damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.
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Original:  Several mishaps, including the failure of a 30-ton electrical transformer, have slowed LHC's progress since the initial start-up on September 10, 2008.
Revised:  Several mishaps, including the failure of a 30 ton electrical transformer, have slowed LHC's progress since the initial start-up on September 10, 2008.
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Original:  The machine has more than 1,200 "dipole " magnets arranged end-to-end in the underground ring.
Revised:  The machine has more than 1,200 dipole magnets arranged end-to-end in the underground ring.
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Original:  After the initial success of accelerating protons through the machine, physicists had hoped they could move ahead quickly to low-energy collisions at 450 billion electron volts and then five-trillion-electron volt collisions as early as mid-October.
Revised:  After the initial success of accelerating protons through the machine, physicists had hoped they could move ahead quickly to low energy collisions at 450 billion electron volts and then five-trillion-electron volt collisions as early as mid-October.
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Original:  After the initial success of accelerating protons through the machine, physicists had hoped they could move ahead quickly to low-energy collisions at 450 billion electron volts and then five-trillion-electron volt collisions as early as mid-October.
Revised:  After the initial success of accelerating protons through the machine, physicists had hoped they could move ahead quickly to low-energy collisions at 450 billion electron volts and then 5 trillion electron volt collisions as early as mid-October.
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Original: Large Hadron Collider (LHC) in CERN, Geneva has suffered  light damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.
Revised: Large Hadron Collider (LHC) in CERN, Geneva has suffered a light damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.
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Original:  Large Hadron Collider (LHC) in CERN, Geneva has suffered a light damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.
Revised:  Large Hadron Collider (LHC) in CERN, Geneva has suffered light damage on September 19, 2008 when one of the giant superconducting magnets that guide the protons failed during a test.
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Original:  The laboratory  in a statement said that an electrical connection between the magnets had melted because of the high current.
Revised:  The laboratory in a statement that an electrical connection between the magnets had melted because of the high current.
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