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Original: The death may have been caused by acts or omissions of the State, its organs or agents, or may otherwise be attributable to the State, in violation of its duty to respect the right to life The death occurred when a person was detained by, or was in the custody of, the State, its organs, or agents .
Revised: the death may have been caused by acts or omissions of the State, its organs or agents, or may otherwise be attributable to the State, in violation of its duty to respect the right to life The death occurred when a person was detained by, or was in the custody of, the State, its organs, or agents .
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Original: The death may have been caused by acts or omissions of the State, its organs or agents, or may otherwise be attributable to the State, in violation of its duty to respect the right to life The death occurred when a person was detained by, or was in the custody of, the State, its organs, or agents .
Revised: The death may have been caused by acts or omissions of the State, its organs or agents, or may otherwise be attributable to the State, in violation of its duty to respect the right to life ; the death occurred when a person was detained by, or was in the custody of, the State, its organs, or agents .
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Original:  ’ The Minnesota Protocol on the Investigation of Potentially Unlawful Death (2016), Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, (New York/Geneva, 2017) para.8 
Revised:  The Minnesota Protocol on the Investigation of Potentially Unlawful Death (2016), Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, (New York/Geneva, 2017) para.8 
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Original:  It was replaced in 2000 after the Central African Republic conducted two peaceful elections  with the entirely civilian composed , UN Peace-Building Support Office in the Central African Republic (BONUCA).
Revised:  It was replaced in 2000 after the Central African Republic conducted two peaceful elections , with the entirely civilian composed , UN Peace-Building Support Office in the Central African Republic (BONUCA).
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Original:  It was replaced in 2000 after the Central African Republic conducted two peaceful elections  with the entirely civilian composed , UN Peace-Building Support Office in the Central African Republic (BONUCA).
Revised:  It was replaced in 2000 after the Central African Republic conducted two peaceful elections with the entirely civilian composed UN Peace-Building Support Office in the Central African Republic (BONUCA).
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Original:  Military officials who were also unpaid and  accused him of unequal treatment of officers from different ethnic groups , attempted three coups in 1996.
Revised:  Military officials were also unpaid and accused him of unequal treatment of officers from different ethnic groups , attempted three coups in 1996.
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Original:  Military officials who were also unpaid and  accused him of unequal treatment of officers from different ethnic groups , attempted three coups in 1996.
Revised:  Military officials who were also unpaid and some of them accused him of unequal treatment of officers from different ethnic groups , attempted three coups in 1996.
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Original:  The efforts were welcomed by the United Nations Security Council under the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1125 in August 1997, which authorised the  force for a period of three months.
Revised:  The efforts were welcomed by the United Nations Security Council with the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1125 in August 1997, which authorised the force for a period of three months.
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Original:  The efforts were welcomed by the United Nations Security Council under the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1125 in August 1997, which authorised the  force for a period of three months.
Revised:  The efforts were welcomed by the United Nations Security Council under the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1125 in August 1997, which authorised the presence of the force for a period of three months.
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Original:  They French forces withdrew from the country in October 1997, closing their long standing military base in Bouar as well.
Revised:  They however withdrew from the country in October 1997, closing their long standing military base in Bouar as well.
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Original:  The French troop withdrawal and  plans for stopping logistic support by April 1998 prompted the Security Council to adopt the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1159 in March 1998 which agreed to establish the United Nations Mission in the Central African Republic by 15 April 1998 to take over from MISAB.
Revised:  The French troop withdrawal and their plans for stopping logistic support by April 1998 prompted the Security Council to adopt the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1159 in March 1998 which agreed to establish the United Nations Mission in the Central African Republic by 15 April 1998 to take over from MISAB.
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Original:  Activities The  force which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by April 15, 1998 with soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of the force .
Revised:  Activities The peacekeeping force which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by April 15, 1998 with soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of the force .
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Original:  Activities The  force which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by April 15, 1998 with soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of the force .
Revised:  Activities The force which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by April 15, 1998 with soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of it .
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Original:  Besides the military personnel, the force contained 24 civilian police personnel, besides civil staff.
Revised:  Besides the military personnel, the force had 24 civilian police personnel, besides civil staff.
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Original:  Even though disarmament was not explicitly mentioned in its mandate, MINURCA continued MISAB's policy of storing and disposing of weapons collected from dissidents.
Revised:  Even though disarmament was not explicitly mentioned in its mandate, MINURCA continued MISAB's policy of storing and disposing off weapons collected from dissidents.
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Original:  The 1350 troop mission was established by the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1159 in March 1998.
Revised:  The 1350-troop mission was established by the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1159 in March 1998.
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Original:  History The medal awarded to peacekeepers for 90 days of consecutive service in MINURCA Ange-Félix Patassé came to power as the first democratically elected president of Central African Republic since its independence, in October 1993.
Revised:  History The medal awarded to peacekeepers for 90 days of consecutive service in MINURCA Ange-Félix Patassé came to power as the first democratically elected president of Central African Republic .
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Original:  He inherited a nearly bankrupt government and there were civil unrests by unpaid civil servants.
Revised:  He inherited a nearly bankrupt government and there was civil unrest by unpaid civil servants.
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Original:  Military officials were also unpaid  and some of them accused him of unequal treatment of officers from different ethnic groups.
Revised:  Military officers were also unpaid and some of them accused him of unequal treatment of officers from different ethnic groups.
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Original:  Military officials were also unpaid  and some of them accused him of unequal treatment of officers from different ethnic groups.
Revised:  Military officials were also unpaid , and some of them accused him of unequal treatment of officers from different ethnic groups.
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Original:  The Bangui Agreements were signed in January 1997 by the government, opposition forces and religious groups as a result of the mediation process .
Revised:  Following this mediation process, the Bangui Agreements were signed in January 1997 by the government, opposition forces and religious groups as a result of the mediation process .
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Original:  The Bangui Agreements were signed in January 1997 by the government, opposition forces and religious groups as a result of the mediation process .
Revised:  The Bangui Agreements were signed in January 1997 by the government, opposition forces and religious groups .
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Original:  The efforts were welcomed by the United Nations Security Council with the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1125 in August 1997, which authorised the presence of the force for a period of three months.
Revised:  The efforts were welcomed by the United Nations Security Council with the Security Council Resolution 1125 in August 1997, which authorised the presence of the force for a period of three months.
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Original:  The United Nations Security Council Resolution 1136 in November 1997 authorised MISAB for another three months.
Revised:  The Security Council Resolution 1136 in November 1997 authorised MISAB for another three months.
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Original:  The French troop withdrawal and their plans for stopping logistic support by April 1998 prompted the Security Council to adopt the United Nations Security Council Resolution 1159 in March 1998 which agreed to establish the United Nations Mission in the Central African Republic by 15 April 1998 to take over from MISAB.
Revised:  The French troop withdrawal and their plans for stopping logistic support by April 1998 prompted the Security Council to adopt the Security Council Resolution 1159 in March 1998 which agreed to establish the United Nations Mission in the Central African Republic by 15 April 1998 to take over from MISAB.
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Original:  The peacekeeping force were instrumental in conducting the legislative elections in late 1998 and the Presidential elections in September 1999.
Revised:  The peacekeeping force were instrumental in conducting the legislative elections in late 1998 and the presidential elections in September 1999.
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Original:  The United Nations Security Council Resolution 1271 adopted in October 1999, extended the mandate of MINURCA till 15 February 2000.Kwame Akonor Joachim Alexander Koops, Norrie MacQueen, Thierry Tardy, Paul D. Williams
Revised:  Security Council Resolution 1271 adopted in October 1999, extended the mandate of MINURCA till 15 February 2000.Kwame Akonor Joachim Alexander Koops, Norrie MacQueen, Thierry Tardy, Paul D. Williams
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Original:  Even though disarmament was not explicitly mentioned in its mandate, MINURCA continued MISAB's policy of storing and disposing off weapons collected from dissidents.
Revised:  Even though disarmament was not explicitly mentioned in its mandate, MINURCA continued MISAB's policy of storing and disposing of weapons collected from dissidents.
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Original:  he was the first democratically elected president of  Central African Republic.
Revised:  he was the first democratically elected president of the Central African Republic.
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Original: International Business Publications, USA Activities The peacekeeping force  which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by April 15 , 1998 with soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of it.
Revised: International Business Publications, USA Activities The peacekeeping force , which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by April 15 , 1998 with soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of it.
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Original: International Business Publications, USA Activities The peacekeeping force  which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by April 15 , 1998 with soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of it.
Revised: International Business Publications, USA Activities The peacekeeping force which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by 15 , 1998 with soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of it.
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Original: International Business Publications, USA Activities The peacekeeping force  which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by April 15 , 1998 with soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of it.
Revised: International Business Publications, USA Activities The peacekeeping force which had a strength of 1350, was assembled by April 15 , 1998 and comprised soldiers from Benin, Burkina Faso, Cameroon, Canada, Chad, Côte d'Ivoire, Egypt, France, Gabon, Mali, Portugal, Senegal, Togo and Tunisia being a part of it.
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Original:  Besides the military personnel, the force had 24 civilian police personnel , besides civil staff.
Revised:  Besides the military personnel, the force had 24 civilian police personnel and civil staff.
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Original:  Security Council Resolution 1271  adopted in October 1999, extended the mandate of MINURCA till 15 February 2000.Kwame Akonor Joachim Alexander Koops, Norrie MacQueen, Thierry Tardy, Paul D.
Revised:  Security Council Resolution 1271 , adopted in October 1999, extended the mandate of MINURCA till 15 February 2000.Kwame Akonor Joachim Alexander Koops, Norrie MacQueen, Thierry Tardy, Paul D.
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Original:  Williams A civilian mission headed by the Representative of the Secretary-General, called the UN Peace-Building Support Office in the Central African Republic (BONUCA formed from the initials of its French name Bureau des Nations Unies pour la consolidation de la paix en République centrafricaine)  took over from MINURCA on 15 February , 2000.
Revised:  Williams A civilian mission headed by the Representative of the Secretary-General, called the UN Peace-Building Support Office in the Central African Republic (BONUCA formed from the initials of its French name Bureau des Nations Unies pour la consolidation de la paix en République centrafricaine) . took over from MINURCA on 15 February , 2000.
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Original:  Williams A civilian mission headed by the Representative of the Secretary-General, called the UN Peace-Building Support Office in the Central African Republic (BONUCA formed from the initials of its French name Bureau des Nations Unies pour la consolidation de la paix en République centrafricaine)  took over from MINURCA on 15 February , 2000.
Revised:  Williams A civilian mission headed by the Representative of the Secretary-General, called the UN Peace-Building Support Office in the Central African Republic (BONUCA formed from the initials of its French name Bureau des Nations Unies pour la consolidation de la paix en République centrafricaine) took over from MINURCA on 15 February 2000.
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Original: Legal career Justice LeBlanc practiced law for 30 years, He concentrated his practice in civil litigation.
Revised: Legal career Justice LeBlanc practised law for 30 years, He concentrated his practice in civil litigation.
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Original:  In 1998, he was appointed as a Justice of the Supreme Court of Nova Scotia on the advice of Prime Minister of Canada Jean Chretien
Revised:  In 1998, he was appointed as a Justice of the Supreme Court of Nova Scotia on the advice of Prime Minister of Canada Jean Chrétien
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Original: As Lieutenant Governor LeBlanc was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Nova Scotia on June 14, 2017  by Governor General of Canada David Lloyd Johnston on the Constitutional advice of Prime Minister of Canada Justin Trudeau.
Revised: As Lieutenant Governor LeBlanc was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Nova Scotia on June 14, 2017 , by Governor General of Canada David Lloyd Johnston on the Constitutional advice of Prime Minister of Canada Justin Trudeau.
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Original: As Lieutenant Governor LeBlanc was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Nova Scotia on June 14, 2017, by Governor General of Canada David Lloyd Johnston on the Constitutional advice of Prime Minister of Canada Justin Trudeau.
Revised: As Lieutenant Governor LeBlanc was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Nova Scotia on June 14, 2017, by Governor General of Canada David Johnston on the Constitutional advice of Prime Minister of Canada Justin Trudeau.
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Original: Safety Classes  Software classification is based on potential for hazard(s) that could cause injury to the user or patient.
Revised: Safety Classes Safety classes Software classification is based on potential for hazard(s) that could cause injury to the user or patient.
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Original: He review politic of thailand by not rude But make people think such as Chuan Kid Chuan Luai He create peaceful revolution theory .
Revised: Dr. Thinsan offers his insightful political analyses and views in polite and constructive ways, which are rare in heated discussions during the over-a-decade-long political conflicts in Thailand through his program called Chuan Kid Chuan Luai He create peaceful revolution theory .
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Original: He review politic of thailand by not rude But make people think such as Chuan Kid Chuan Luai He create peaceful revolution theory .
Revised: He review politic of thailand by not rude But make people think such as Chuan Kid Chuan Lui. Importantly, he has founded a peaceful revolution theory .
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Original: Snea Thinsan, or Piangdin Rakthai, was born on June 18, 1965, in Chiang Rai Province  .
Revised: Snea Thinsan, or Piangdin Rakthai, was born on June 18, 1965, in Chiang Rai Province , Thailand .
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Original:  He describes deeds done by powerfu people against the helpless, and states the many ideas that made him ponder about the lack of humanity.
Revised:  He describes deeds done by powerful people against the helpless, and states the many ideas that made him ponder about the lack of humanity.
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Original:  Twain takes Darwin's evolution theory that humans evolved from earlier ancestors, or “lower animals,” and turns itupside down . He describes deeds done by powerful people against the helpless, and states the many ideas that made him ponder about the lack of humanity.
Revised:  Twain takes Darwin's evolution theory that humans evolved from earlier ancestors, or “lower animals,” and reverses it . He describes deeds done by powerful people against the helpless, and states the many ideas that made him ponder about the lack of humanity.
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Original: Historical Occurrence 202x202px|A figure of Osiris covered in chalconatronite, atacamite, and cuprite corrosion.
Revised: Historical Occurrence 
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Original:  Chalconatronite has also been found and recorded in Australia, Germany, and Colorado .199x199px|Chalconatronite from Deremo Mine, Colorado, USA, field of view 6mm . Historical Occurrence
Revised:  Chalconatronite has also been found and recorded in Australia, Germany, and Colorado . Historical Occurrence
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Original: Chalconatronite is a carbonate mineral  that contains copper, sodium, carbon, oxygen  and hydrogen, its chemical formula is Na2Cu(CO3)2•3(H2O).
Revised: Chalconatronite is a carbonate mineral that contains copper, sodium, carbon, oxygen , and hydrogen, its chemical formula is Na2Cu(CO3)2•3(H2O).
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Original:   Historical Occurrence Chalconatronite was also found on iron and copper Roman armor in 1982 at a site in Chester, England.
Revised:  Bronze diease Most chalconatronite formed on bronze and silver that have been treated with either sodium sesquicarbonate or sodium cyanide to prevent corrosion and bronze disease. The mineral has also been proven to form on the surface of copper artifacts after being treated with aqueous sodium carbonate. This formation by using sodium sesquicarbonate is undesirable by many antique collectors, as the mineral changes the patinas of copper artifacts. When the mineral forms, it can replace copper salts within the patina, and turn the color from a rich green to a blue-green or even black. Historical Occurrence Chalconatronite was also found on iron and copper Roman armor in 1982 at a site in Chester, England.
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Original:  After the result is cooled, a natron solution would be added to precipitate a synthetic form of chalconatronite, as sodium copper carbonate .
Revised:  After the result is cooled, a natron solution would be added to precipitate a synthetic form of chalconatronite, as sodium copper carbonate 
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Original:  See Also Atacamite Cuprite Patina%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Carbonate minerals Category:Copper minerals Category:Corrosion Category:Minera
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Carbonate minerals Category:Copper minerals Category:Corrosion Category:Minera
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Original:  See Also Atacamite Cuprite Patina%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Carbonate minerals Category:Copper minerals Category:Corrosion Category:Minera
Revised:  See Also Atacamite Cuprite Patina%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Carbonate minerals Category:Copper minerals Category:Corrosion Category:Minera
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Original:  See Also Atacamite Cuprite Patina%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Carbonate minerals Category:Copper minerals Category:Corrosion Category:Minera
Revised:  See Also Atacamite Cuprite Patina%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References 
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Original: Bronze diease Most chalconatronite formed on bronze and silver that have been treated with either sodium sesquicarbonate or sodium cyanide to prevent corrosion and bronze disease.
Revised: Bronze Disease Most chalconatronite formed on bronze and silver that have been treated with either sodium sesquicarbonate or sodium cyanide to prevent corrosion and bronze disease.
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Original: After victory against France in the Seven Years War', The British government , at the time under the personal control of King George III, decided to rein in the rapidly growing American colonies, with 2.5 million population in contrast to Britain's 6 million.
Revised: After victory against France in the Seven Years War', The British government decided to rein in the rapidly growing American colonies, with 2.5 million population in contrast to Britain's 6 million.
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Original:  The new policy in 1765 of imposing new taxes, without seeking the consent of colonial parliaments, was highly controversial in Britain itself , and deeply unpopular in the Thirteen Colonies.
Revised:  The new policy in 1765 of imposing taxes, without seeking the consent of colonial parliaments, was highly controversial in Britain itself , and deeply unpopular in the Thirteen Colonies.
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