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Original:  This is important as society strives to balance the need for development with the need to support the lifestyle choices and wishes of residents," said local member of federal Peter Slipper in an e-mail to Wikinews.
Revised:  This is important as society strives to balance the need for development with the need to support the lifestyle choices and wishes of residents," said Peter Slipper in an e-mail to Wikinews.
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Original: "The situation highlights the need for leadership at a state level that is prepared with work with the Regional Councils to ensure laws and regulations are consistant within community standards.
Revised: "The situation highlights the need for leadership at a state level that is prepared with work with the Regional Councils to ensure laws and regulations are consistent within community standards.
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Original: 200px|The 24 hour McDonalds at Mooloolaba Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it will not be able to challenge a McDonald's Australia appeals process.
Revised: 200px|The 24 hour McDonald's at Mooloolaba Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it will not be able to challenge a McDonald's Australia appeals process.
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Original:  "Council has received legal advice back that McDonalds will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
Revised:  "Council has received legal advice back that McDonald's will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
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Original:  Meyer-Gleaves said the group, named Say No To McDonalds , has three priorities if it is forced to negotiate: the alley between the motel currently on the site and the shop next door is to be closed off, the McDonalds is to operate 24 hours per day on weekends only and a backfence or wall is to be built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
Revised:  Meyer-Gleaves said the group, named Say No To McDonald's , has three priorities if it is forced to negotiate: the alley between the motel currently on the site and the shop next door is to be closed off, the McDonalds is to operate 24 hours per day on weekends only and a backfence or wall is to be built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
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Original:  Meyer-Gleaves said the group, named Say No To McDonalds , has three priorities if it is forced to negotiate: the alley between the motel currently on the site and the shop next door is to be closed off, the McDonalds is to operate 24 hours per day on weekends only and a backfence or wall is to be built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
Revised:  Meyer-Gleaves said the group, named Say No To McDonalds , has three priorities if it is forced to negotiate: the alley between the motel currently on the site and the shop next door is to be closed off, the McDonald's is to operate 24 hours per day on weekends only and a backfence or wall is to be built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
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Original: "The situation highlights the need for leadership at a state level that is prepared with work with  the Regional Councils to ensure laws and regulations are consistent within community standards.
Revised: "The situation highlights the need for leadership at a state level that is prepared with work with sic the Regional Councils to ensure laws and regulations are consistent within community standards.
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Original:  The attack occured at 10am local time (UTC+3) in the centre of a crowd outside the police recruitement centre building.
Revised:  The attack occurred at 10am local time (UTC+3) in the centre of a crowd outside the police recruitement centre building.
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Original:  The attack occured at 10am local time (UTC+3) in the centre of a crowd outside the police recruitement centre building.
Revised:  The attack occured at 10am local time (UTC+3) in the centre of a crowd outside the police recruitment centre building.
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Original:  Insurgents often chose police recruitement centres to attack and this centre, located on Palestine Street, was previously attacked.
Revised:  Insurgents often chose police recruitment centres to attack and this centre, located on Palestine Street, was previously attacked.
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Original:  The police believe that there was an accompliace who remot detonated the bomber.
Revised:  The police believe that there was an accomplice who remotely detonated the bomber.
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Original:  Some reports suggest he crashed into the crows on a motorcycle and detonated a belt of exposives .
Revised:  Some reports suggest he crashed into the crows on a motorcycle and detonated a belt of explosives .
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Original: 28 people have been killed in an explosion outside a police recruitment building in Baghdad, Iraq.
Revised: 28 people were killed in an explosion outside a police recruitment building in Baghdad, Iraq.
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Original:  The attack occurred at 10am local time (UTC+3) in  the centre of a crowd outside the police recruitment centre building.
Revised:  The attack occurred at 10am local time (UTC+3) in the centre of a crowd outside the police recruitment building.
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Original:  There were a further 57 injuries .
Revised:  There were a further 57 people were injured in the attack .
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Original:  Insurgents often chose police recruitment centres to attack and this centre, located on Palestine Street, was previously attacked.
Revised:  Insurgents often choose police recruitment centres to attack and this centre, located on Palestine Street, was previously attacked.
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Original:  Insurgents often chose police recruitment centres to attack and this centre, located on Palestine Street, was previously attacked.
Revised:  Insurgents often chose police recruitment centres to attack and this centre, located on Palestine Street, has been previously attacked.
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Original:  Concrete blocks have been constructed and checkpoints have been set up nearby to prevent such an attack .
Revised:  In an attempt to prevent such attacks concrete blocks were previously constructed and checkpoints have been set up nearby to prevent such an attack .
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Original:  Concrete blocks have been constructed and checkpoints have been set up nearby to prevent such an attack .
Revised:  Concrete blocks have been constructed and checkpoints established .
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Original:  The bomb went off one hour after the demonstration had started and according to some sources that bomber mingled with crowd.
Revised:  The bomb went off one hour after the demonstration had started and according to some sources the bomber mingled within the crowd.
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Original:  There was a second bomb.
Revised:  There may have been a second bomb.
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Original:  Some reports suggest he crashed into the crows on a motorcycle and detonated a belt  of explosives.
Revised:  Some reports suggest he crashed into the crowds on a motorcycle and detonated a belt of explosives.
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Original:  An eye-witness said that the police started firing the guns "randomly" after the explosion.
Revised:  An eye-witness said that the police started firing weapons "randomly" after the explosion.
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Original: In what is seen as a thinly veiled threat the North Korean government in Pyongyang has issued a statement saying that it could not guarantee the safety of airliners transiting its airspace.
Revised: In what has been interpreted as a thinly veiled threat the North Korean government in Pyongyang has issued a statement saying that it could not guarantee the safety of airliners transiting its airspace.
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Original:  The threat has been widely condemned, with South Korean spokesman Kim Ho-nyeon saying "Threatening civilian airliners' normal operations under international aviation regulations is not only against the international rules but is an act against humanity..
Revised:  The statement has been widely condemned, with South Korean spokesman Kim Ho-nyeon saying "Threatening civilian airliners' normal operations under international aviation regulations is not only against the international rules but is an act against humanity..
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Original: ." The latest round of sabre rattling comes on the eve of two events.
Revised: ." The latest interchange of words comes on the eve of two events.
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Original:  But now I want you to be among the first to know that I have made plans to renew and revive The Smashing Pupkins ."
Revised:  But now I want you to be among the first to know that I have made plans to renew and revive The Smashing Pumpkins ."
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Original:  On the same day he released his debut solo album, former Smashing Pumpkins frontman Billy Corgan announced, "I want my band back, and my songs, and my dreams."
Revised: Billy Corgan On the same day he released his debut solo album, former Smashing Pumpkins frontman Billy Corgan announced, "I want my band back, and my songs, and my dreams."
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Original:  Under the title A Message to Chicago From Billy Corgan , the alternative-rock icon also wrote, "For a year now I have walked around with a secret, a secret I chose to keep.
Revised:  Under the title A Message to Chicago From Billy Corgan . The alternative-rock icon also wrote, "For a year now I have walked around with a secret, a secret I chose to keep.
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Original:  Those words appeared in a full-page ad that ran in Tuesday's edition of the Chicago Tribune under the title  A Message to Chicago From Billy Corgan.
Revised:  Those words appeared in a full-page ad that ran in Tuesday's edition of the Chicago Tribune under the title , A Message to Chicago From Billy Corgan.
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Original: The group, which included guitarist James Iha, dummer Jimmy Chamberlain, and bassists D'Arcy Wretzky and Melissa Auf der Maur, last played together in 2000.
Revised: The group, which included guitarist James Iha, drummer Jimmy Chamberlain, and bassists D'Arcy Wretzky and Melissa Auf der Maur, last played together in 2000.
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Original: The group, which included guitarist James Iha, drummer Jimmy Chamberlain , and bassists D'Arcy Wretzky and Melissa Auf der Maur, last played together in 2000.
Revised: The group, which included guitarist James Iha, drummer Jimmy Chamberlin , and bassists D'Arcy Wretzky and Melissa Auf der Maur, last played together in 2000.
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Original: According to a report released by the United Nations' World Health Organisation (WHO), over four thousand people have died from cholera in Zimbabwe, while 89  000 total cases of the disease have been reported.
Revised: According to a report released by the United Nations' World Health Organisation (WHO), over four thousand people have died from cholera in Zimbabwe, while 89 , 000 total cases of the disease have been reported.
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Original:  A spokeswoman for the WHO, however, said that the real death toll is higher due to under-reporting because of  reaching certain areas of Zimbabwe.
Revised:  A spokeswoman for the WHO, however, said that the real death toll is higher due to under-reporting because of difficulty reaching certain areas of Zimbabwe.
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Original:  A spokeswoman for the WHO, however, said that the real death toll is higher due to under-reporting because of difficulty reaching certain areas of Zimbabwe .
Revised:  A spokeswoman for the WHO, however, said that the real death toll is higher due to under-reporting because of difficulty reaching certain areas of the country .
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Original:  The number of cases a week have recently been averaging around 4  000 to 4  500 cases per week, down from an earlier peak of about eight thousand cases per week.
Revised:  The number of cases a week have recently been averaging around 4 , 000 to 4 500 cases per week, down from an earlier peak of about eight thousand cases per week.
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Original:  The number of cases a week have recently been averaging around 4  000 to 4  500 cases per week, down from an earlier peak of about eight thousand cases per week.
Revised:  The number of cases a week have recently been averaging around 4 000 to 4 , 500 cases per week, down from an earlier peak of about eight thousand cases per week.
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Original:  Nearby buildings including the building and nearby offices had also been evacuated .
Revised:  Some nearby buildings have also been evacuated, including the building and nearby offices had also been evacuated .
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Original:  Nearby buildings including the building and nearby offices had also been evacuated .
Revised:  Nearby buildings including the building and offices of the .
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Original:  If the structure showed signs of collapse staff could be evacuated immediately.
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Original: The and the motorway had been closed to traffic due to the smoke until further notice .
Revised: The motorway was closed to traffic due to the smoke until further notice .
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Original:  The Community Broadcasting Association of Australia (CBAA) has urged the Australian government to increase funding for community broadcasters.
Revised: Comunity television broadcasts religiously themed programing The Community Broadcasting Association of Australia (CBAA) has urged the Australian government to increase funding for community broadcasters.
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Original:  According to CBAA President Deborah Welch, community television is the training ground for the Australian media industry.
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Original:  and C31 Adelaide broadcasts Indoor Cricket Netball and South Australian National Football League matches.
Revised:  and C31 Adelaide broadcasts Indoor Cricket 
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Original: The officer, described as an experienced veteran with 20 years of service, responding 9.45pm to a call for help from a femember of the public in the Lismore area in Craigavon  when he was shot.
Revised: The officer, described as an experienced veteran with 20 years of service, was responding to a call for help from a femember of the public in the Lismore area in Craigavon when he was shot.
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Original: The officer, described as an experienced veteran with 20 years of service, responding 9.45pm to a call for help from a femember of the public in the Lismore area in Craigavon  when he was shot.
Revised: The officer, described as an experienced veteran with 20 years of service, responding 9.45pm to a call for help from a female member of the public in the Lismore area in Craigavon when he was shot.
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Original:  The PSNI, a member of a two vehicle patrol   , believe that the officer was hit by long range gun fire from a shooter secreted in the Republican stronghold of the Drumbeg estate.
Revised:  A two vehicle patrol , believe that the officer was hit by long range gun fire from a shooter secreted in the Republican stronghold of the Drumbeg estate.
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Original:  The PSNI, a member of a two vehicle patrol   , believe that the officer was hit by long range gun fire from a shooter secreted in the Republican stronghold of the Drumbeg estate.
Revised:  The PSNI, a member of a two vehicle patrol The PSNI , believe that the officer was hit by long range gun fire from a shooter secreted in the Republican stronghold of the Drumbeg estate.
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Original: The officer, described as an experienced veteran with 20 years of service, was responding to a call for help from a female member of the public in the Lismore area in Craigavon 9.45pm when he was shot.
Revised: The officer, described as an experienced veteran with 20 years of service, was responding to a call for help from a female member of the public in the Lismore area of Craigavon when he was shot.
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Original:  A two vehicle patrol was sent to the incident given previous trouble in the area, with the members of one vehicle dealing with the incident and those of the second vehicle providing overwatch , it was the members of the vehicle providing cover that was attacked.
Revised:  A two vehicle patrol was sent to the incident given previous trouble in the area, with the members of one vehicle dealing with the incident and those of the second vehicle providing cover , it was the members of the vehicle providing cover that was attacked.
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Original: A policeman has been killed in County Armagh, Northern Ireland by  gunmen a mere 48 hours after two soldiers were killed.
Revised: A police officer has been killed in County Armagh, Northern Ireland by gunmen a mere 48 hours after two soldiers were killed.
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Original:  In what is presumed to be the work of dissident Republicans hoping to derail the peace process, the police officer was shot in the head  before 10:00 p.m. on March 9.
Revised:  In what is presumed to be an attempt by the dissident Republicans to derail the peace process, the police officer was shot in the head before 10:00 p.m. on March 9.
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Original:  In what is presumed to be the work of dissident Republicans hoping to derail the peace process, the police officer was shot in the head  before 10:00 p.m. on March 9.
Revised:  In what is presumed to be the work of dissident Republicans hoping to derail the peace process, the police officer was shot in the head just before 10:00 p.m. on March 9.
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Original:  The officer, described as an experienced veteran with 20 years of service, was responding to a call for help from a female member of the public in the Lismore area of Craigavon when he was shot.
Revised:  The officer, described as an experienced veteran with 20 years of service, was responding to a call for help in the Lismore area of Craigavon when he was shot.
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Original:   A two vehicle patrol was sent to the incident given previous trouble in the area , with the members of one vehicle dealing with the incident and those of the second vehicle providing cover, it was the members of the vehicle providing cover that was attacked.
Revised:  A two vehicle patrol was sent to the incident given previous trouble in the area , with the members of one vehicle dealing with the incident , whilst those in the second vehicle providing cover, it was the members of the vehicle providing cover that was attacked.
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Original:  The shooting  led to a call for unity and calm from a broad spectrum of the community ranging from spokesmen for the Ulster Volunteer Force, who called for the gunmen to be dealt with through the courts, to Sinn Féin were quick to condemn the gunmen and to offer their condolences to the family of the dead officer.
Revised:  The shooting The shooting has led to a call for unity and calm from a broad spectrum of the community ranging from spokesmen for the Ulster Volunteer Force, who called for the gunmen to be dealt with through the courts, to Sinn Féin were quick to condemn the gunmen and to offer their condolences to the family of the dead officer.
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Original: Philippine' s January export receipts equaled US$2.494 billion, the lowest figures since April 2001, when exports were at $2.246 billion.
Revised: Philippines' January export receipts equaled US$2.494 billion, the lowest figures since April 2001, when exports were at $2.246 billion.
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Original: West Indies held on to a nerve-wracking draw in the fifth and final test of the five match test series at Queen's Park Oval, Port-of-Spain, Trinidad against England to win the five test series 1-0 and regain the Wisden trophy after a gap of nine years.
Revised: West Indies held on to a draw in the fifth and final test of the five match test series at Queen's Park Oval, Port-of-Spain, Trinidad against England to win the five test series 1-0 and regain the Wisden trophy after a gap of nine years.
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Original: West Indies held on to a nerve-wracking draw in the fifth and final test of the five match test series at Queen's Park Oval, Port-of-Spain, Trinidad against England to win the five test series 1-0 and regain the Wisden trophy after a gap of nine years.
Revised: West Indies held on to a nerve-wracking draw in the fifth and final test of the five match test series at Queen's Park Oval, Port-of-Spain, Trinidad against the England cricket team to win the five test series 1-0 and regain the Wisden trophy after a gap of nine years.
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Original:  To win the match  West Indies were set a target of 240 runs in 66 overs or to bat two sessions for a draw.
Revised:  To win the match , West Indies were set a target of 240 runs in 66 overs or to bat two sessions for a draw.
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Original:  England had drawn the Previous two tests in Barbados and Antigua and had lost the first test in Jamaica by an innings and 23 runs.
Revised:  England had drawn the previous two tests in Barbados and Antigua and had lost the first test in Jamaica by an innings and 23 runs.
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Original:  Matt Prior was declared Player of the match and Ramnaresh Sarwan was declared the Player of the series . Brief Scores :%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% England 1st Innings : 546 for 6 dec (Collingwood 161, Strauss 142, Prior 131) West Indies 1st Innings : 544 Allout (Chanderpaul 147 Not Out, Nash 109, Gayle 102)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% England 2nd Innings : 237 for 6 dec (Pietersen 102) West Indies 2nd Innings : 114 for 8 (Hinds 20, Ramdhin 17 Not Out , Swann 3-13
Revised:  Matt Prior was declared Player of the match and Ramnaresh Sarwan was declared the player of the series . Brief Scores :%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% England 1st Innings : 546 for 6 dec (Collingwood 161, Strauss 142, Prior 131) West Indies 1st Innings : 544 Allout (Chanderpaul 147 Not Out, Nash 109, Gayle 102)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% England 2nd Innings : 237 for 6 dec (Pietersen 102) West Indies 2nd Innings : 114 for 8 (Hinds 20, Ramdhin 17 Not Out , Swann 3-13
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Original:  Matt Prior was declared Player of the match and Ramnaresh Sarwan was declared the Player of the series . Brief Scores :%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% England 1st Innings : 546 for 6 dec (Collingwood 161, Strauss 142, Prior 131) West Indies 1st Innings : 544 Allout (Chanderpaul 147 Not Out, Nash 109, Gayle 102)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% England 2nd Innings : 237 for 6 dec (Pietersen 102) West Indies 2nd Innings : 114 for 8 (Hinds 20, Ramdhin 17 Not Out , Swann 3-13
Revised:  Matt Prior was declared Player of the match and Ramnaresh Sarwan was declared the Player of the series Brief Scores :%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% England 1st Innings : 546 for 6 dec (Collingwood 161, Strauss 142, Prior 131) West Indies 1st Innings : 544 Allout (Chanderpaul 147 Not Out, Nash 109, Gayle 102)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% England 2nd Innings : 237 for 6 dec (Pietersen 102) West Indies 2nd Innings : 114 for 8 (Hinds 20, Ramdhin 17 Not Out , Swann 3-13
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