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Original:  Snoop Dogg posted $35,000 bail and was scheduled to appear in court Dec. 12.
Revised:  Snoop Dogg posted $35,000 bail and is expected back in Los Angeles County Superior Court on December 12, 2006.
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Original:  When officers searched the vehicle  they found a gun and marijuana , police said . "There was no basis for this arrest ," the rapper's attorney, Donald Etra, said in a statement.
Revised:  When officers searched the vehicle , they found a gun and marijuana , police said . "There was no basis for this arrest ," the rapper's attorney, Donald Etra, said in a statement.
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Original:  When officers searched the vehicle  they found a gun and marijuana , police said . "There was no basis for this arrest ," the rapper's attorney, Donald Etra, said in a statement.
Revised:  When officers searched the vehicle they found a gun and marijuana . "There was no basis for this arrest ," the rapper's attorney, Donald Etra, said in a statement.
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Original:  " We believe that once this is cleared up, all charges will be dismissed . " The Orange County district attorney's office has been considering charges against Snoop Dogg after authorities last month discovered a 21-inch collapsible baton in his bags as he boarded a New York-bound flight from John Wayne International Airport .
Revised:  " We believe that once this is cleared up, all charges will be dismissed , " The Orange County district attorney's office has been considering charges against Snoop Dogg after authorities last month discovered a 21-inch collapsible baton in his bags as he boarded a New York-bound flight from John Wayne International Airport .
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Original: Rap artist , Snoop Dogg was arrested for possession of an illegal drug and having a gun , according to police  . Snoop' s real name is Calvin Broadus and was arrested at 3:45 p.m.
Revised: Rap artist Snoop Dogg was arrested for possession of an illegal drug and having a gun , according to police . Snoop' s real name is Calvin Broadus and was arrested at 3:45 p.m.
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Original: Rap artist , Snoop Dogg was arrested for possession of an illegal drug and having a gun , according to police  . Snoop' s real name is Calvin Broadus and was arrested at 3:45 p.m.
Revised: Rap artist , Snoop Dogg was arrested for possession of an illegal drug and posession of a firearm , according to police . Snoop' s real name is Calvin Broadus and was arrested at 3:45 p.m.
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Original: Rap artist , Snoop Dogg was arrested for possession of an illegal drug and having a gun , according to police  . Snoop' s real name is Calvin Broadus and was arrested at 3:45 p.m.
Revised: Rap artist , Snoop Dogg was arrested for possession of an illegal drug and having a gun , according to police . The rappers' real name is Calvin Broadus and was arrested at 3:45 p.m.
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Original: Rap artist , Snoop Dogg was arrested for possession of an illegal drug and having a gun , according to police  . Snoop' s real name is Calvin Broadus and was arrested at 3:45 p.m.
Revised: Rap artist , Snoop Dogg was arrested for possession of an illegal drug and having a gun , according to police . Snoop' s real name is Calvin Broadus . He was arrested at 3:45 p.m.
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Original:   Thursday at Bob Hope Airport located in Burbank, California.
Revised:  on Thursday at Bob Hope Airport located in Burbank, California.
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Original:  Broadus paid  $35,000 bail and is expected back in Los Angeles County Superior Court on December 12, 2006.
Revised:  Broadus paid the $35,000 bail and is expected back in Los Angeles County Superior Court on December 12, 2006.
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Original:  Airport police officers stopped Snoop Dogg at a loading zone for a vehicle code violation and when officers searched the vehicle, they found a gun and marijuana .  "There was no basis for this arrest.
Revised:  Airport police officers stopped the artist for parking in the airport passenger loading and unloading zone. Upon conducting a search of the vehicle, they found a gun and marijuana . "There was no basis for this arrest.
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Original:  Airport police officers stopped Snoop Dogg at a loading zone for a vehicle code violation and when officers searched the vehicle, they found a gun and marijuana .  "There was no basis for this arrest.
Revised:  Airport police officers stopped Snoop Dogg at a loading zone for a vehicle code violation and when officers searched the vehicle, the police found a gun and marijuana . "There was no basis for this arrest.
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Original:  We believe that once this is cleared up, all charges will be dismissed , " said Broadus's attorney, Donald Etra in a statement .
Revised:  We believe that once this is cleared up, all charges will be dismissed " said Broadus's attorney, Donald Etra in a statement .
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Original:  In September, Broadus attempted to carry a folding police batallion onto an aircraft and was arrested at John Wayne Airport located in Orange County, California 
Revised:  In September, Broadus attempted to carry a folding police baton onto an aircraft and was arrested at John Wayne Airport located in Orange County, California 
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Original:  Upon conducting a search of the vehicle, the police found a gun and a quantity  marijuana inside.
Revised:  Upon conducting a search of the vehicle, the police found a gun and a quantity of marijuana inside.
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Original:  The current record holder is the Toronto Maple Leaves Maple Leaves .
Revised:  The current record holder is the Toronto Maple Leafs .
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Original: "I mean, it ’ s very exciting.
Revised: "I mean, it ' s very exciting.
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Original:  I think we ’ re all proud of what we ’ ve accomplished so far.
Revised:  I think we ' re all proud of what we ’ ve accomplished so far.
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Original:  I think we ’ re all proud of what we ’ ve accomplished so far.
Revised:  I think we ’ re all proud of what we ' ve accomplished so far.
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Original:  But at the end of the day, it ’ s not what we ’ re aiming for down the road," said Daniel Briere, the co-captain for the Sabres.
Revised:  But at the end of the day, it ' s not what we ’ re aiming for down the road," said Daniel Briere, the co-captain for the Sabres.
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Original:  But at the end of the day, it ’ s not what we ’ re aiming for down the road," said Daniel Briere, the co-captain for the Sabres.
Revised:  But at the end of the day, it ’ s not what we ' re aiming for down the road," said Daniel Briere, the co-captain for the Sabres.
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Original:  Begining at the end of last season, the Sabres have won 15 games in a row
Revised:  Beginning at the end of last season, the Sabres have won 15 games in a row
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Original:  My heartfelt sympathies go out to these families, friends and loved one affected by this tragedy 
Revised:  My heartfelt sympathies go out to these families, friends and loved one affected by this tragedy .
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Original: The reward for the nation's worst arson-related attack was increased to $500,000 today after the arsonist caused four deaths to firefighters, and serious burn injuries to a fifth , with  burns covering almost 90 percent of his body.
Revised: The reward for the nation's worst arson-related attack was increased to $500,000 today after the arsonist caused four deaths to firefighters, and serious burn injuries to a fifth . burns covering almost 90 percent of his body.
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Original:  The blaze, which was ignited in uninhabitted brushlands, dictated a mandatory evacuation of the thousands of civillians in the area , and destroyed more than 24,000 acres of land.
Revised:  The blaze, which was ignited in uninhabited brushlands, dictated a mandatory evacuation of the thousands of civillians in the area , and destroyed more than 24,000 acres of land.
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Original:  The blaze, which was ignited in uninhabitted brushlands, dictated a mandatory evacuation of the thousands of civillians in the area , and destroyed more than 24,000 acres of land.
Revised:  The blaze, which was ignited in uninhabitted brushlands, dictated a mandatory evacuation of the thousands of civillians in the area and destroyed more than 24,000 acres of land.
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Original:  My heartfelt sympathies go out to these families, friends and loved one affected by this tragedy.  
Revised:  My heartfelt sympathies go out to these families, friends and loved one affected by this tragedy. " 
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Original: The blaze, which was ignited in uninhabited brushlands, dictated a mandatory evacuation of the thousands of civillians in the area and destroyed more than 24,000 acres of land.
Revised: The blaze, which was ignited in uninhabited brushlands, dictated a mandatory evacuation of the thousands of civilians in the area and destroyed more than 24,000 acres of land.
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Original: Theodore Vouyouklais, a Greek pathologist professor, has confirmed that the two children found dead in their hotel room in the Greek village of Gouvia on w:CorfuCorfu were killed by carbon monoxide poisoning.
Revised: Theodore Vouyouklais, a Greek pathologist professor, has confirmed that the two children found dead in their hotel room in the Greek village of Gouvia on Corfu were killed by carbon monoxide poisoning.
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Original:  He said that petrol had been rubbed on his nose and that he had been threatened with a lit cigarette lighter held close to his head, being to that he would be burned.
Revised:  He said that petrol had been rubbed on his nose and that he had been threatened with a lit cigarette lighter held close to his head, being told that he would be burned.
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Original:  The other defendents include Colonel Mendonca who is accused of failing to ensure that the detainees were not ill treated.
Revised:  The other defendants include Colonel Mendonca who is accused of failing to ensure that the detainees were not ill treated.
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Original:  Source Related reports British Army soldiers to be court martialled for war crimes July 20, 2005%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Seven British soldiers face war crimes charges October 26, 2006 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:United Kingdom Category:Iraq Category:Europe Category:Middle Ea
Revised:  Related reports British Army soldiers to be court martialled for war crimes July 20, 2005%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Seven British soldiers face war crimes charges October 26, 2006 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:United Kingdom Category:Iraq Category:Europe Category:Middle Ea
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Original:  Source Related reports British Army soldiers to be court martialled for war crimes July 20, 2005%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Seven British soldiers face war crimes charges October 26, 2006 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:United Kingdom Category:Iraq Category:Europe Category:Middle Ea
Revised:  Source %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Seven British soldiers face war crimes charges October 26, 2006 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:United Kingdom Category:Iraq Category:Europe Category:Middle Ea
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Original:  Source Related reports British Army soldiers to be court martialled for war crimes July 20, 2005%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Seven British soldiers face war crimes charges October 26, 2006 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:United Kingdom Category:Iraq Category:Europe Category:Middle Ea
Revised:  Source Related reports British Army soldiers to be court martialled for war crimes July 20, 2005%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:United Kingdom Category:Iraq Category:Europe Category:Middle Ea
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Original: The war crimes court trying seven British servicemen heard written evidence from Mr Kifah Taha Musa Mutairi .
Revised: A war crimes court trying seven British servicemen heard written evidence from Mr Kifah Taha Musa Mutairi .
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Original:  He died in ,  what is said to have been , an unrelated incident  when the roof of his house fell on him.
Revised:  He died in , what is said to have been an unrelated incident when the roof of his house fell on him.
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Original:  He died in ,  what is said to have been , an unrelated incident  when the roof of his house fell on him.
Revised:  He died in , what is said to have been , an unrelated incident , when the roof of his house fell on him.
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Original:  Martha Stewart was sentenced to five months in prison, a further five months under tag and fined US$30  000 for charges of conspiracy and obstruction stemming from insider trading in ImClone shares after the company's wonder drug Erbitux lost its FDA licence
Revised:  Martha Stewart was sentenced to five months in prison, a further five months under tag and fined US$30 , 000 for charges of conspiracy and obstruction stemming from insider trading in ImClone shares after the company's wonder drug Erbitux lost its FDA licence
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Original:  "It is such a profound and fundamental phenomena that, as a physicist, I want to learn everything about [Brownian motion]," said Arjun Yodh, Physics professor at the University of Pennsylvania.
Revised:  "It is such a profound and fundamental phenomenon that, as a physicist, I want to learn everything about [Brownian motion]," said Arjun Yodh, Physics professor at the University of Pennsylvania.
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Original: Post-doc Yilong Han explained this by saying, "since ellipsoids are longer than they are wide, they experience more water resistance going in one direction than the other …
Revised: Post-doc Yilong Han explained this by saying, "since ellipsoids are longer than they are wide, they experience more water resistance going in one direction than the other ...
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Original:  It also allows the president to take control of any state troops, forces, or national guar 
Revised:  It also allows the president to take control of any state troops, forces, or national guard. 
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Original:  It also allows the president to take control of any state troops, forces, or national guard .
Revised:  It also allows the president to take control of any state troops, forces, or national guard 
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Original:  Jesse Jackson, an American politician, and other leaders signed a letter distributed by WakeUpWal-Mart.com, asking the company to end its relationship with Nelson    
Revised:  Jesse Jackson, an American politician, and other leaders signed a letter distributed by WakeUpWal-Mart.com, asking the company to end its relationship with Nelson . 
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Original: In an interview with the Associated Press he said, "There was no intention to offend anybody and it's unfortunate if people took offense.
Revised: In an interview with the Associated Press Nelson said, "There was no intention to offend anybody and it's unfortunate if people took offense.
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Original:  It also "criticised" Canada , which, currently has nothing too do with the American election . "Canada can take care of North Korea," a man in the television ad says.
Revised:  The ad also "criticised" Canada , which, currently has nothing too do with the American election . "Canada can take care of North Korea," a man in the television ad says.
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Original:  It also "criticised" Canada , which, currently has nothing too do with the American election . "Canada can take care of North Korea," a man in the television ad says.
Revised:  It also "criticised" Canada . "Canada can take care of North Korea," a man in the television ad says.
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Original: Wal-Mart fired Terry Nelson, a Republican strategist, last night because he had connections to the Republican Party advertisement in Tennessee.
Revised: Wal-Mart fired Terry Nelson, a Republican strategist, last night because he had connections to a controversial Republican Party advertisement in Tennessee.
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Original:   The ad also "criticised" Canada.
Revised:  . The ad also "criticised" Canada.
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Original: Wal-Mart fired Terry Nelson, a Republican strategist, last night because he had connections to a controversial Republican Party advertisement in Tennessee.
Revised: Wal-Mart severed links with Terry Nelson, a Republican strategist, last night because he had connections to a controversial Republican Party advertisement in Tennessee.
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Original:  Early reports indicate that he committed suicide, but the circumstances of his death will most likely result in furture investigation by the authorities.
Revised:  Early reports indicate that he committed suicide, but the circumstances of his death will most likely result in further investigation by the authorities.
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Original:  Nobody has yet be arrested for the murder, but it was believed that Mr. Kravchenko  evidence could have lead to an arrest
Revised:  Nobody has yet be arrested for the murder, but it was believed that Mr. Kravchenko 's evidence could have lead to an arrest
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Original:  Nobody has yet be arrested for the murder, but it was believed that Mr. Kravchenko  evidence could have lead to an arrest
Revised:  Nobody has yet be arrested for the murder, but it was believed that Mr. Kravchenko evidence could have led to an arrest
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Original:  Mr. Gonadze 's headless body was buried in the woods near Kiev but his head was never found.
Revised:  Mr. Gongadze 's headless body was buried in the woods near Kiev but his head was never found.
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Original: The Indian Space Research Organisation (ISRO) confirmed that the first test of the cryogenic stage of a rocket engine had been a success.
Revised: The Indian Space Research Organisation (ISRO) announced that the first test of the cryogenic stage of a rocket engine had been a success.
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Original:  The blaze has now destroyed as many as 27 homes, and has forced the evacuation of 500 more  
Revised:  The blaze has now destroyed as many as 27 homes, and has forced the evacuation of 500 more . 
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Original: Incumbent Israeli president Moshe Katsav has been advised by his attorney-general, Menachem Mazuz, to step down from his presidential duties and to hand over control of the country whilst police look into outstanding rape allegations against him.
Revised: Incumbent Israeli President Moshe Katsav has been advised by his attorney-general, Menachem Mazuz, to step down from his presidential duties and to hand over control of the country whilst police look into outstanding rape allegations against him.
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Original:  He denies the allegations.
Revised:  The President denies the allegations.
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Original: Incumbent Israeli President Moshe Katsav has been advised by his attorney-general, Menachem Mazuz, to step down from his presidential duties and to hand over control of the country whilst police investigate allegations of rape and sexually molestation of several female employees.
Revised: Incumbent Israeli President Moshe Katsav has been advised by his attorney-general, Menachem Mazuz, to step down from his presidential duties and to hand over control of the country whilst police investigate allegations that he raped and sexually molested several female employees.
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Original: Mazuz has issued the advisory to the president to  "consider suspending himself from duty by asking parliament to declare him temporarily incapacitated".
Revised: Mazuz has issued the advisory to the president to The advisory asks the President to "consider suspending himself from duty by asking parliament to declare him temporarily incapacitated".
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Original:  He also commented that a trial would require Katsav to stand down pending a verdict.
Revised:  Mazuz also commented that a trial would require Katsav to stand down pending a verdict.
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Original:  Incumbent Israeli President Moshe Katsav has been advised by his attorney-general, Menachem Mazuz, to step down from his presidential duties and to hand over control of the country whilst police investigate allegations that he raped and sexually molested several female employees.
Revised: right Incumbent Israeli President Moshe Katsav has been advised by his attorney-general, Menachem Mazuz, to step down from his presidential duties and to hand over control of the country whilst police investigate allegations that he raped and sexually molested several female employees.
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Original:    The justice ministry is currently compiling the evidence against Katsav and deciding whether it warrants a prosecution.
Revised: Katsav, however, has refused to give up his leadership and has said that he is innocent of any and all charges against him. The justice ministry is currently compiling the evidence against Katsav and deciding whether it warrants a prosecution.
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Original:    The justice ministry is currently compiling the evidence against Katsav and deciding whether it warrants a prosecution.
Revised:  "The president reiterates and emphasizes that he is a victim to a low plot spun against him and sooner or later it will be proven that the allegations against him are false stories and a lie, and the truth will be brought to light," said a statement released by Katsav's office. The justice ministry is currently compiling the evidence against Katsav and deciding whether it warrants a prosecution.
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Original:    The justice ministry is currently compiling the evidence against Katsav and deciding whether it warrants a prosecution.
Revised:  "The president trusts his righteousness and innocence totally. The authorities must wait until the end of the investigation and for the attorney-general's final stand," added the statement. The justice ministry is currently compiling the evidence against Katsav and deciding whether it warrants a prosecution.
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Original:  While a speaker of the German ministery of defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occured only shortly after the German minister of defence, Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more * . Previous events include Israeli jets aiming at a helicopter carrying the German commander of the UNIFIL sea forces and six F-16 passing a German vessel in low altitude presumably firing two rounds above it.
Revised:  While a speaker of the German ministery of defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occured only shortly after the German minister of defence, Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more . Previous events include Israeli jets aiming at a helicopter carrying the German commander of the UNIFIL sea forces and six F-16 passing a German vessel in low altitude presumably firing two rounds above it.
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Original: Repeated incidents of controversial approaches of Israeli F-16 jets to German military vessels, as well as claims of the opposition parties that Angela Merkel's government had tricked them into approving Germany's Libanon mission cause ongoing controversies surrounding the historical deployment of Bundeswehr troops to the Middle East.
Revised: Repeated incidents of controversial approaches of Israeli F-16 jets to German military vessels, as well as claims of the opposition parties that Angela Merkel's government had tricked them into approving Germany's Lebanon mission cause ongoing controversies surrounding the historical deployment of Bundeswehr troops to the Middle East.
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