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Original: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes  with better coaching and additional training, Saohaga could qualify for the Rio Paralympics based on her performance . Saohaga threw a distance of 5.23 metres in one throw, setting a personal best career throw , and finished with a season's best score of 228.
Revised: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes , with better coaching and additional training, Saohaga could qualify for the Rio Paralympics based on her performance . Saohaga threw a distance of 5.23 metres in one throw, setting a personal best career throw , and finished with a season's best score of 228.
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Original: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes  with better coaching and additional training, Saohaga could qualify for the Rio Paralympics based on her performance . Saohaga threw a distance of 5.23 metres in one throw, setting a personal best career throw , and finished with a season's best score of 228.
Revised: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes with better coaching and additional training, she has the potential to qualify for the Rio Paralympics based on her performance . Saohaga threw a distance of 5.23 metres in one throw, setting a personal best career throw , and finished with a season's best score of 228.
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Original: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes  with better coaching and additional training, Saohaga could qualify for the Rio Paralympics based on her performance . Saohaga threw a distance of 5.23 metres in one throw, setting a personal best career throw , and finished with a season's best score of 228.
Revised: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes with better coaching and additional training, Saohaga could qualify for the Rio Paralympics on performance grounds . Saohaga threw a distance of 5.23 metres in one throw, setting a personal best career throw , and finished with a season's best score of 228.
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Original: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes  with better coaching and additional training, Saohaga could qualify for the Rio Paralympics based on her performance . Saohaga threw a distance of 5.23 metres in one throw, setting a personal best career throw , and finished with a season's best score of 228.
Revised: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes with better coaching and additional training, Saohaga could qualify for the Rio Paralympics based on her performance . Saohaga 's best throw in competition was a distance of 5.23 metres in one throw, setting a personal best career throw , and finished with a season's best score of 228.
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Original: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes  with better coaching and additional training, Saohaga could qualify for the Rio Paralympics based on her performance . Saohaga threw a distance of 5.23 metres in one throw, setting a personal best career throw , and finished with a season's best score of 228.
Revised: Having qualified for the Paralympics as a wildcard invite , a representative of the Salomon Islands Paralympic Committee believes with better coaching and additional training, Saohaga could qualify for the Rio Paralympics based on her performance . Saohaga threw a distance of 5.23 metres . This set a personal-best career throw for the athlete, and sees her finishing with a season's best score of 228.
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Original:  She beat several competitors including Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti, Rhodah Mutale of Zambia, Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria.
Revised:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti, Rhodah Mutale of Zambia, Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria.
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Original:  While training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time practicing at the same time was andgot her picture taken with Pistrious
Revised:  In training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time practicing at the same time was andgot her picture taken with Pistrious
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Original:  While training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time practicing at the same time was andgot her picture taken with Pistrious
Revised:  While training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time on-field at the same time was andgot her picture taken with Pistrious
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Original:  While training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time practicing at the same time was andgot her picture taken with Pistrious
Revised:  While training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time practicing at the same time as ; and, getting her picture taken with Pistrious
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Original: Hellen Saohaga at the Paralympic Village on Friday  Solomon Islands during this year's Opening CeremonyExcerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition London, England—When Hellen Saohaga finished fifteenth in Saturday's women's shot put — F57/58, she set a personal best and became the second-highest finishing Solomon Islander ever in Olympic and Paralympic competition;
Revised: Hellen Saohaga at the Paralympic Village on Friday The Solomon Islands during this year's Opening CeremonyExcerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition London, England—When Hellen Saohaga finished fifteenth in Saturday's women's shot put — F57/58, she set a personal best and became the second-highest finishing Solomon Islander ever in Olympic and Paralympic competition;
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Original: Hellen Saohaga at the Paralympic Village on Friday  Solomon Islands during this year's Opening CeremonyExcerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition London, England—When Hellen Saohaga finished fifteenth in Saturday's women's shot put — F57/58, she set a personal best and became the second-highest finishing Solomon Islander ever in Olympic and Paralympic competition;
Revised: Hellen Saohaga at the Paralympic Village on Friday Solomon Islands during the Opening Ceremony, with Saohaga as flag-bearer London, England—When Hellen Saohaga finished fifteenth in Saturday's women's shot put — F57/58, she set a personal best and became the second-highest finishing Solomon Islander ever in Olympic and Paralympic competition;
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Original:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including  Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
Revised:  Her efforts saw her finish ahead of several competitors including Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
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Original:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including  Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
Revised:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including : Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
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Original:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including  Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
Revised:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including Nephtalie Jean Louis of , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
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Original:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including  Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
Revised:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
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Original:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including  Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
Revised:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
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Original:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including  Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria .
Revised:  Her effors saw her finish ahead of several competitors including Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of Zambia , Madinat Abdullayeva of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of .
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Original: Hellen Saohaga at the Paralympic Village on Friday The Solomon Islands during the Opening Ceremony, with Saohaga as flag-bearer London, England — When Hellen Saohaga finished fifteenth in Saturday's women's shot put — F57/58, she set a personal best and became the second-highest finishing Solomon Islander ever in Olympic and Paralympic competition;
Revised: Hellen Saohaga at the Paralympic Village on Friday The Solomon Islands during the Opening Ceremony, with Saohaga as flag-bearer London, England — When Hellen Saohaga finished fifteenth in Saturday's women's shot put - F57/58, she set a personal best and became the second-highest finishing Solomon Islander ever in Olympic and Paralympic competition;
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Original:  only Olympic powerlifter has bettered her performance, coming twelfth in competition at the 2012 Summer Olympics . Saohaga's best throw in competition was a distance of 5.23 metres.
Revised:  only Olympic powerlifter has bettered her performance, coming twelfth in competition at the . Saohaga's best throw in competition was a distance of 5.23 metres.
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Original:  Her efforts saw her finish ahead of several competitors including: Nephtalie Jean Louis of , Rhodah Mutale of , Madinat Abdullayeva  of and Nadia Medjedj of . Excerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition In training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time on-field at the same time as ;
Revised:  Her efforts saw her finish ahead of several competitors including: Nephtalie Jean Louis of , Rhodah Mutale of , Madinat Abdullayeva , of and Nadia Medjedj of . Excerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition In training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time on-field at the same time as ;
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Original:  and, getting her picture taken with the "Blade Runner"
Revised:  and, got her picture taken with the "Blade Runner"
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Original:  Her efforts saw her finish ahead of several competitors including: Nephtalie Jean Louis of  , Rhodah Mutale of  , Madinat Abdullayeva, of  and Nadia Medjedj of  . Excerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition In training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time on-field at the same time as , and got her picture taken with the "Blade Runner"
Revised:  Her efforts saw her finish ahead of several competitors including: Nephtalie Jean Louis of Haiti , Rhodah Mutale of , Madinat Abdullayeva, of and Nadia Medjedj of . Excerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition In training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time on-field at the same time as , and got her picture taken with the "Blade Runner"
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Original:  Her efforts saw her finish ahead of several competitors including: Nephtalie Jean Louis of  , Rhodah Mutale of  , Madinat Abdullayeva, of  and Nadia Medjedj of  . Excerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition In training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time on-field at the same time as , and got her picture taken with the "Blade Runner"
Revised:  Her efforts saw her finish ahead of several competitors including: Nephtalie Jean Louis of , Rhodah Mutale of , Madinat Abdullayeva, of Azerbaijan and Nadia Medjedj of . Excerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition In training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time on-field at the same time as , and got her picture taken with the "Blade Runner"
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Original:  Her efforts saw her finish ahead of several competitors including: Nephtalie Jean Louis of  , Rhodah Mutale of  , Madinat Abdullayeva, of  and Nadia Medjedj of  . Excerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition In training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time on-field at the same time as , and got her picture taken with the "Blade Runner"
Revised:  Her efforts saw her finish ahead of several competitors including: Nephtalie Jean Louis of , Rhodah Mutale of , Madinat Abdullayeva, of and Nadia Medjedj of Algeria . Excerpt from an interview with Saohaga prior to competition In training at the practice athletics field in London, Saohaga spent time on-field at the same time as , and got her picture taken with the "Blade Runner"
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Original: In the previous centuries in Middle East, there were no need for diet prescriptions to put on one's table vegetablesand fruits, mainly of the citrus family  .
Revised: A Mediterranean diet is typically rich in fruits, mainly of the citrus family .
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Original:  The study reported in April (see below) emphatizes about adding to this mediterranean diet with less alcohol taking
Revised:  "This large study in a leading journal adds to the growing weight of evidence that diet and lifestyle are very important risk factors for Alzheimer's disease." was the reaction of Professor Clive Ballard of the Alzheimer's Society
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Original: In the previous centuries in Middle East, there were no need for diet prescriptions to put on one's table vegetables and fruits, mainly of the citrus family.
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Original:  Nowadays, the young generation is less likely to walk relatively short distances and is driven by advertisements to use more occidental recipes including hamburgers in fast-food restaurants.
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Original:  The upcoming 2006 Brampton municipal election, to be held November 13, features an array of candidates looking to represent their wards in city council.
Revised:  The upcoming 2006 Mississauga municipal election, to be held November 13, features an array of candidates looking to represent their wards in city council.
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Original:  How do you feel about these plans? A: Q: How do you feel about Mississauga's rate of expansion? A:  Q: How could Mississauga further itself in attracting corporate investment? A:  Q: Why have you chosen to involve yourself in the political process? A:  Q: Many councillors are quite seasoned in the civic political process.
Revised:  How do you feel about these plans? A: Q: How do you feel about Mississauga's rate of expansion? A: Q: How could Mississauga further itself in attracting corporate investment? A: Q: Why have you chosen to involve yourself in the political process? A: I feel it is time for a younger person that has more in common with the residents to be a leader. Ward 10 is a young ward filled with young couples with young children who will be able to reap the rewards of this vibrant neighbourhood. I fit into that same category. Q: Many councillors are quite seasoned in the civic political process.
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Original:  Italy have appeared at every World Cup since the first tournament in 1987, their best result being in 2003 with two wins . Category:Rugby World Cup Category:Rug
Revised:  Italy have appeared at every World Cup since the first tournament in 1987, their best result being in 2003 with two wins Category:Rugby World Cup Category:Rug
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Original:  Italy have appeared at every World Cup since the first tournament in 1987, their best result being in 2003 with two wins . Category:Rugby World Cup Category:Rug
Revised:  Italy have appeared at every World Cup since the first tournament in 1987, their best result being in 2003 with two wins . 
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Original: The discovery was reported in the American Physical Society journal Physical Review C on October 9, 2006.
Revised: The discovery was reported in the American Physical Society journal Physical Review C on October 9, 
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Original:  The element is currently expected to be named Dubnadium (Dn) after James geophert
Revised:  2006
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Original:  Element 118 has been created in experiments conducted at the Flerov Laboratory of Fort Dodge in Iowa, United states by a collaboration of researchers from Russia's Joint Institute for Nuclear Research and the Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory in California .
Revised:  Element 118 has been created in experiments conducted at the Flerov Laboratory of Fort Dodge in Iowa, United states by a collaboration of researchers from Russia's Joint Institute for Nuclear Research and from the United States's Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory in California .
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Original:  Element 118 has been created in experiments conducted at the Flerov Laboratory of Fort Dodge in Iowa, United states by a collaboration of researchers from Russia's Joint Institute for Nuclear Research and the Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory in California .
Revised:  Element 118 has been created in experiments conducted at the Flerov Laboratory of Fort Dodge in Iowa, United states by a collaboration of researchers from Russia's Joint Institute for Nuclear Research and the Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory .
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Original:  Element 118, the heaviest element yet found, was produced through collisions that fused together Californium and Calcium atoms  .
Revised:  Element 118, the heaviest element yet found, through collisions that fused together Californium and Calcium atoms .
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Original:  It was alleged that a lead researcher, Victor Ninov, fabricated the experimental data that indicated the formation of three element 118 atoms .
Revised:  It was alleged that a lead researcher, Victor Ninov, fabricated the experimental data that indicated the formation of three element 118 atoms 
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Original:  The discovery was reported in the American Physical Society journal Physical Review C on October 9, 2006
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Original:  Element 118 has been created in experiments conducted in Dubna, Russia by a collaboration of researchers from Russia's Joint Institute for Nuclear Research and from the United States' s Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory.
Revised:  Element 118 has been created in experiments conducted in Dubna, Russia by a collaboration of researchers from Russia's Joint Institute for Nuclear Research and from the United States' Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory.
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Original: The Mozilla Foundation today released an update to the world's fastest-growing browser.
Revised: The Mozilla Foundation recently released an update to the world's fastest-growing browser.
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Original: The Mozilla Foundation today released an update to the world's fastest-growing browser.
Revised: The Mozilla Foundation today released an update to Mozilla Firefox. According to the developers,
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Original:  Mozilla Firefox 1.0.1 is available at the time of writing in US English, French, Spanish (Latin American), German, Italian, Dutch, Finnish and Polish, among many other language
Revised:  Mozilla Firefox 1.0.1 is available at the time of writing in US English, French, Spanish (Latin American), German, Italian, Dutch, Finnish and Polish, among many other languages
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Original: Mozilla Firefox 1.0.1 is available at the time of writing in US English, French, Spanish (Latin American), German, Italian, Dutch, Finnish and Polish, among many other languages .
Revised: Mozilla Firefox 1.0.1 is available at the time of writing in US English, French, Spanish (Latin American), German, Italian, Dutch, Finnish and Polish, among many other languages 
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Original:  The flaws include domain spoofing by using international (foreign language) script and making it look like the real site's name, erasing files on Windows using .lnk (shortcut) files and erasing directories on Linux and other UNIX systems
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Original:  Lucie County Shriff Ken Mascara.
Revised:  Lucie County Sheriff Ken Mascara.
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Original: Sheriff's deputies are also looking for the family's car, a black 1998 Jeep Cherokee with a temporary Florida tag of M952180 in the rear window.
Revised: Sheriff's deputies are also looking for the family's car, a black 1998 Jeep Cherokee with temporary Florida licence plate M952180 in the rear window.
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Original:  You can call (772) 462-3230 or 1-800-273-TIPS if you have any information .
Revised:  Those with information are encouraged to call 1- (772) 462-3230 or 1-800-273-TIPS if you have any information .
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Original:  You can call (772) 462-3230 or 1-800-273-TIPS if you have any information .
Revised:  You can call (772) -462-3230 or 1-(800)-273-TIPS .
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Original:  Authorities believe that this was a suspects car, as it was not at the victim's home, but neighbors of the family said that it was their car.
Revised:  Authorities believe that this was a suspect's car, as it was not at the victim's home, but neighbors of the family said that it was their car.
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Original: The 2006 Currie Cup  ended in a draw, with the Free State Cheetahs and Blue Bulls drawing 28-all after 20 minutes of extra-time in the final at Vodacom Park in Bloemfontein.
Revised: The 2006 Currie Cup ended in a draw, with the Free State Cheetahs and Blue Bulls drawing 28-all after 20 minutes of extra-time at Vodacom Park in Bloemfontein.
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Original: The final was the first in Bloemfountain since the 1994 season at Springbok Park, where Transvaal defeated the Free State team.
Revised: The final was the first in Bloemfontein since the 1994 season at Springbok Park, where Transvaal defeated the Free State team.
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Original: Wagga Wagga , New South Wales — Earlier today, Australian opposition leader Tony Abbott competed in the 2012 Lake to Lagoon fun run in Wagga Wagga, alongside with the Member for the Riverina, Michael McCormack , amongst over 2000 runners and walkers.
Revised:  , New South Wales — Earlier today, Australian opposition leader Tony Abbott competed in the 2012 Lake to Lagoon fun run in Wagga Wagga, alongside with the Member for the Riverina, Michael McCormack , amongst over 2000 runners and walkers.
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Original: Wagga Wagga , New South Wales — Earlier today, Australian opposition leader Tony Abbott competed in the 2012 Lake to Lagoon fun run in Wagga Wagga, alongside with the Member for the Riverina, Michael McCormack , amongst over 2000 runners and walkers.
Revised: Wagga Wagga , New South Wales — Earlier today, competed in the 2012 Lake to Lagoon fun run in Wagga Wagga, alongside with the Member for the Riverina, Michael McCormack , amongst over 2000 runners and walkers.
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