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Original: U.S. President acknowledging Pakistan’s sovereignty and pledging continued support for the country in economic and security fields at Waldorf Asotria Hotel as they met on the sidelines of the 63rd UN General Assembly session.
Revised: U.S. President acknowledging Pakistan’s sovereignty and pledge continued support for the country in economic and security fields at Waldorf Asotria Hotel as they met on the sidelines of the 63rd UN General Assembly session.
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Original: U.S. President acknowledging Pakistan’s sovereignty and pledging continued support for the country in economic and security fields at Waldorf Asotria Hotel as they met on the sidelines of the 63rd UN General Assembly session.
Revised: U.S. President acknowledging Pakistan’s sovereignty and pledging continued support for the country in economic and security fields at Waldorf Asotria Hotel on the sidelines of the 63rd UN General Assembly session.
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Original:  President of Pakistan Mr. Asif Ali Zardari and President George W. Bush discussed strengthening bilateral relationship.
Revised:  Zardari and Bush discussed strengthening bilateral relationship.
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Original:  At the outset,He said Pakistan was an important ally and reaffirmed the United States commitment to assist Pakistan’s economic development while also citing Washington’s bipartisan support in this respect  
Revised:  At the outset,He said Pakistan was an important ally and reaffirmed the United States commitment to assist Pakistan’s economic development while also citing Washington’s bipartisan support in this respect . 
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Original:  Bush also expressed U.S.  full support for Pakistan's initiative for holding a conference "Friends of Pakistan" to drum up international support for its economic development.
Revised:  Bush also conveyed the U.S. full support for Pakistan's initiative for holding a conference "Friends of Pakistan" to drum up international support for its economic development.
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Original:  Bush also expressed U.S.  full support for Pakistan's initiative for holding a conference "Friends of Pakistan" to drum up international support for its economic development.
Revised:  Bush also expressed U.S. 's full support for Pakistan's initiative for holding a conference "Friends of Pakistan" to drum up international support for its economic development.
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Original:  While talking to press Pakistan's Information Minister Sherry Rahman said "President Bush praised President Zardari's courage and commitment to fight terrorism despite his great personal loss , ".
Revised:  While talking to press Pakistan's Information Minister Sherry Rahman said "President Bush praised President Zardari's courage and commitment to fight terrorism despite his great personal loss ".
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Original: U.S. President George W. Bush acknowledge Pakistan’s sovereignty and pledge continued support for the country in economic and security fields.
Revised: U.S. President George W. Bush acknowledged Pakistan’s sovereignty and pledge continued support for the country in economic and security fields.
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Original: U.S. President George W. Bush acknowledge Pakistan’s sovereignty and pledge continued support for the country in economic and security fields.
Revised: U.S. President George W. Bush acknowledge Pakistan’s sovereignty and pledged continued support for the country in economic and security fields.
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Original:   [[Image:Bush and Zardari 2008-9-23.jpg|Bush and Zardari meeting at the sidelines of the 63rd UN General Assembly session]] Zardari and Bush discussed strengthening bilateral relationship.
Revised:  and discussed strengthening their bilateral relationship. [[Image:Bush and Zardari 2008-9-23.jpg|Bush and Zardari meeting at the sidelines of the 63rd UN General Assembly session]] Zardari and Bush discussed strengthening bilateral relationship.
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Original:  Bush also conveyed the U.S.'s full support for Pakistan's initiative for holding a conference "Friends of Pakistan"  to drum up international support for its economic development.
Revised:  Bush also conveyed the U.S.'s full support for the "Friends of Pakistan" to drum up international support for its economic development.
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Original:  While talking to press  Pakistan's Information Minister Sherry Rahman said "President Bush praised President Zardari's courage and commitment to fight terrorism despite his great personal loss".
Revised:  While talking to press , Pakistan's Information Minister Sherry Rahman said "President Bush praised President Zardari's courage and commitment to fight terrorism despite his great personal loss".
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Original:  Bush expressed a profound sense of grief over loss of heavy loss of life in the weekend bombing on the Marriot hotel, Islamabad.
Revised:  Bush expressed grief over the heavy loss of life in the weekend bombing on the Marriot hotel, Islamabad.
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Original:  Bush expressed a profound sense of grief over loss of heavy loss of life in the weekend bombing on the Marriot hotel, Islamabad.
Revised:  Bush expressed a profound sense of grief over loss of heavy loss of life during the weekend bombing on the Marriot hotel, Islamabad.
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Original:  His comments were likely in response to Monday's incident when US helicopters crossed Pakistani borders.
Revised:  His comments were likely in response to the Pakistani president's anger when US helicopters crossed Pakistani borders.
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Original:  Image:Bush and Zardari 2008-9-23.jpg|Bush and Zardari meeting at the sidelines of the 63rd UN General Assembly session Bush also expressed full support for the "Friends of Pakistan" initiative to drum up international support for its economic development.
Revised:  Bush also expressed full support for the "Friends of Pakistan" initiative to drum up international support for its economic development.
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Original:  While talking to  press, Pakistan's Information Minister Sherry Rahman said "President Bush praised President Zardari's courage and commitment to fight terrorism despite his great personal loss".
Revised:  While talking to the press, Pakistan's Information Minister Sherry Rahman said "President Bush praised President Zardari's courage and commitment to fight terrorism despite his great personal loss".
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Original:  Bush expressed grief over the heavy loss of life during the weekend bombing on the Marriot hotel, Islamabad.
Revised:  Bush also expressed grief over the heavy loss of life during the weekend bombing on the Marriot hotel, Islamabad.
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Original:  In an excavation conducted recently at the site  a large number of human remains were found that display evidences of physical injury or disease.
Revised:  In an excavation conducted recently at the site , a large number of human remains were found that display evidences of physical injury or disease.
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Original:  Radiocarbon tests have indicated that the original bluestone circle was built around 2300 BC.
Revised:  Radiocarbon tests indicates that the original bluestone circle was built around 2300 BC.
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Original:  Dating fragments of charcoal fragments indicated that the site was inhabited as early as 7339 BC by hunter-gatherers
Revised:  However dating of charcoal fragments indicated that the site was inhabited as early as 7339 BC by hunter-gatherers
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Original:  Dating fragments of charcoal fragments indicated that the site was inhabited as early as 7339 BC by hunter-gatherers
Revised:  Dating fragments of charcoal fragments reveal that the site was inhabited as early as 7339 BC by hunter-gatherers
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Original: Archaeologists Timothy Darvill , Bournemouth University and Geoff Wainwright, President of the Society of Antiquaries, claimed that they have found evidence to suggest that Stonehenge was once a center of healing.
Revised: Archaeologists Timothy Darvill of Bournemouth University and Geoff Wainwright, President of the Society of Antiquaries, claimed that they have found evidence to suggest that Stonehenge was once a center of healing.
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Original: Archaeologists Timothy Darvill , Bournemouth University and Geoff Wainwright, President of the Society of Antiquaries, claimed that they have found evidence to suggest that Stonehenge was once a center of healing.
Revised: Archaeologists Timothy Darvill , Bournemouth University and Geoff Wainwright, President of the Society of Antiquaries, claimed to have found evidences that suggest Stonehenge was once a center of healing.
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Original:  In an excavation conducted recently at the site, a large number of human remains were found that display evidences of physical injury or disease.
Revised:  In an excavation conducted recently at the site, a large number of human remains were found that display signs of physical injury or disease.
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Original:  Analysis of the teeth from the skeletons point that about half of them were from outside the area.
Revised:  Study of the teeth from the skeletons point that about half of them were from outside the area.
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Original:  Analysis of the teeth from the skeletons point that about half of them were from outside the area.
Revised:  Analysis of the teeth from the skeletons indicates that about half of them were from outside the area.
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Original:  About 80 of such huge bluestone blocks were transported from the Preseli Hills in Pembrokeshire, Wales to  Salisbury plains.
Revised:  About 80 of such bluestone blocks were transported from the Preseli Hills in Pembrokeshire, Wales to Salisbury plains.
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Original:  About 80 of such huge bluestone blocks were transported from the Preseli Hills in Pembrokeshire, Wales to  Salisbury plains.
Revised:  About 80 of such huge bluestone blocks were transported from the Preseli Hills in Pembrokeshire, Wales to the Salisbury plains.
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Original:  However dating of  charcoal fragments reveal that the site was inhabited as early as 7339 BC by hunter-gatherers 
Revised:  However dating of Dating of some charcoal fragments reveal that the site was inhabited as early as 7339 BC by hunter-gatherers 
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Original:  In an excavation conducted recently at the site, a large number of human remains were found that display signs of physical injury or disease.
Revised:  In an excavation conducted at the site, a large number of human remains were found that display signs of physical injury or disease.
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Original:  Bluestones or spotted Preseli dolerite chips at the site led the researchers to conclude the stones were revered for their healing properties.
Revised:  A large number of bluestone or spotted Preseli dolerite chips at the site led the researchers to conclude the stones were revered for their healing properties.
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Original:  Bluestones or spotted Preseli dolerite chips at the site led the researchers to conclude the stones were revered for their healing properties.
Revised:  Bluestones or spotted Preseli dolerite chips found during the excavation led the researchers to conclude the stones were revered for their healing properties.
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Original:  Bluestones or spotted Preseli dolerite chips at the site led the researchers to conclude the stones were revered for their healing properties.
Revised:  Bluestones or spotted Preseli dolerite chips at the site led the researchers to conclude the stones were venerated for their healing properties.
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Original:  The inner circle of bluestones are the earliest stone structures found in this site.
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Original:  Radiocarbon tests indicates that the original bluestone circle was built around 2300 BC.
Revised:  Radiocarbon dating indicates that the original bluestone circle was built around 2300 BC.
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Original:  Researchers  conclude that the Archer came to Stonehenge to be healed.
Revised:  Researchers therefore conclude that the Archer came to Stonehenge to be healed.
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Original:  Dating of some charcoal fragments reveal that the site was inhabited as early as 7200 BC by groups of hunter-gatherers.
Revised:  Dating of charcoal fragments revealed that the site was inhabited as early as 7200 BC by groups of hunter-gatherers.
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Original: Archaeologists Timothy Darvill of Bournemouth University and Geoff Wainwright, President of the Society of Antiquaries, claimed to have found evidences that suggest Stonehenge was once a center of healing.
Revised: Archaeologists Timothy Darvill of Bournemouth University and Geoff Wainwright, President of the Society of Antiquaries, claimed to have found evidence that sStonehenge was once a center of healing.
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Original: Archaeologists Timothy Darvill of Bournemouth University and Geoff Wainwright, President of the Society of Antiquaries, claimed to have found evidence that sStonehenge was once a center of healing.
Revised: Archaeologists Timothy Darvill of Bournemouth University and Geoff Wainwright, President of the Society of Antiquaries, claimed to have found evidence that Stonehenge was once a center of healing.
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Original:  It's going to create a lot more enthusiasm among consumers of that information or in the words of Alan Greenspan, 'irrational exuberance.  
Revised:  It's going to create a lot more enthusiasm among consumers of that information or in the words of Alan Greenspan, 'irrational exuberance. ' 
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Original:   Erick Turner, who coauthored a similar study earlier this year, expressed concerns to Scientific American  : When trials are selectively published …
Revised:  Ken Johnson, senior vice president of the Pharmaceutical Research and Manufacturers of America (PhRMA), defended the pharmaceutical industry by saying FDA review of new drug applications is more important than publishing the results of medication trials in medical journals. Approved medications come with labels that give patients and doctors enough information, assures Mr. Johnson. Erick Turner, who coauthored a similar study earlier this year, expressed concerns to Scientific American : When trials are selectively published …
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Original:  ' Ken Johnson, senior vice president of the Pharmaceutical Research and Manufacturers of America (PhRMA), defended the pharmaceutical industry by saying FDA review of new drug applications is more important than publishing the results of medication trials in medical journals.
Revised:  Ken Johnson, senior vice president of the Pharmaceutical Research and Manufacturers of America (PhRMA), defended the pharmaceutical industry by saying FDA review of new drug applications is more important than publishing the results of medication trials in medical journals.
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Original:  It's going to create a lot more enthusiasm among consumers of that information or in the words of Alan Greenspan, 'irrational exuberance.    ] 
Revised:  It's going to create a lot more enthusiasm among consumers of that information or in the words of Alan Greenspan, 'irrational exuberance. ''' ] 
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Original:  It's going to create a lot more enthusiasm among consumers of that information or in the words of Alan Greenspan, 'irrational exuberance.    ] 
Revised:  It's going to create a lot more enthusiasm among consumers of that information or in the words of Alan Greenspan, 'irrational exuberance. other] 
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Original:  Bush is scheduled to speak to the people of the U.S. in a televised speech tonight   .
Revised:  Bush is scheduled to speak to the people of the U.S. in a televised speech tonight . .
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Original: United States presidential candidate John McCain announced today that he is suspending his campaign and sought to postpone a scheduled debate with his opponent, Barack Obama  to focus on the country's financial crisis and says that Obama should also suspend his campaign.
Revised: United States presidential candidate John McCain announced today that he is suspending his campaign and sought to postpone a scheduled debate with his opponent, Barack Obama , to focus on the country's financial crisis and says that Obama should also suspend his campaign.
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Original:  He called the crisis "historic ", stressing the need for legislation and warning of "devastating consequences".
Revised:  He called the crisis "historic ," stressing the need for legislation and warning of "devastating consequences".
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Original: United States presidential candidate John McCain announced today that he is suspending his campaign and sought to postpone a scheduled debate with his opponent, Barack Obama, to focus on the country's financial crisis and says that Obama should also suspend his campaign.
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Original:  McCain said he would be asking president George W. Bush to call a meeting for members of Congress in order to support Bush's controversial $700 billion bailout plan, but also said that there is no consensus for the proposal and it will not pass in its current form.
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Original: The study Equality for Women: Where Do We Stand on Millennium Development Goal 3? looks at the achievements made by the developing world as laid out by the Millennium Development Goals  .
Revised: The study Equality for Women: Where Do We Stand on Millennium Development Goal 3? looks at the achievements made by the developing world as laid out by the Millennium Development Goals (MD) .
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Original:  They include halving extreme poverty, reducing child mortality rates, fighting disease epidemics such as AIDS, and developing a global partnership for development   
Revised:  They include halving extreme poverty, reducing child mortality rates, fighting disease epidemics such as AIDS, and developing a global partnership for development . 
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Original: Improvements in education have improved in 82 countries out of 122 and are on track to meet their MD goals.
Revised: Education has improved in 82 countries out of 122 and are on track to meet their MD goals.
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Original:  However, 19 countries, 13 of which are in Sub- Saharan Africa, are seriously off track to meet their target  
Revised:  However, 19 countries, 13 of which are in Sub- Saharan Africa, are seriously off track to meet their target . 
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Original:  McEnulty has been interviewed several times by Wikinews over the past few months, but in one held earlier this week with reporter Joseph Ford, he went into detail on why he'd be a good president, why its necessary to vote for a third party candidate this year, and most importantly, why you should give him your vote.
Revised:  McEnulty has been interviewed several times by Wikinews over the past few months, but in one held earlier this week with reporter Joseph Ford, he went into detail on why he'd be a good president, why its necessary to support a third party candidate this year, and most importantly, why you should give him your vote.
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Original: So far, the news on this November's U.S. presidential election has been dominated by Republican and Democratic candidates John McCain and Barack Obama.
Revised: So far, the news on this November's U.S. presidential election has been dominated by Republican Party and Democratic Party nominees John McCain and Barack Obama.
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Original: However , there are several others.
Revised: Unbeknownst to many , there are several others.
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Original: So far, the news on this November's U.S. presidential election has been dominated by Republican Party and Democratic Party nominees John McCain and Barack Obama.
Revised: So far, the news on the U.S. presidential election has been dominated by Republican Party and Democratic Party nominees John McCain and Barack Obama.
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Original: United States president George W. Bush addressed the nation on the economic financial crisis from inside the White House saying the economic situation is "serious" and is "in danger" of becoming "a long and painful recession."
Revised: United States President George W. Bush addressed the nation on the economic financial crisis from inside the White House saying the economic situation is "serious" and is "in danger" of becoming "a long and painful recession."
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Original:   "We are in the midst of a serious financial crisis and the federal government is responding with decisive action," Bush said in his televised speech.
Revised:  President Bush spoke to the nation in the East Room of the White House "We are in the midst of a serious financial crisis and the federal government is responding with decisive action," Bush said in his televised speech.
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Original:  North Korea has banned nuclear inspectors from the United Nations International Atomic Energy Agency  from inspecting its nuclear facility, the Yongbyon Nuclear Scientific Research Center.
Revised:  North Korea has banned nuclear inspectors from the United Nations International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) from inspecting its nuclear facility, the Yongbyon Nuclear Scientific Research Center.
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Original:  "We strongly urge the North to reconsider these steps and come back immediately into compliance with its obligations," said Rice, referring to an agreement reached during the last round of six-party talks . N. Korea restarted its nuclear program when the U.S. failed to follow through with its agreement to take North Korea off the national list of state-sponsored terrorism supporters
Revised:  "We strongly urge the North to reconsider these steps and come back immediately into compliance with its obligations," said Rice, referring to an agreement reached during the last round of six-party talks N. Korea restarted its nuclear program when the U.S. failed to follow through with its agreement to take North Korea off the national list of state-sponsored terrorism supporters
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Original:  "We strongly urge the North to reconsider these steps and come back immediately into compliance with its obligations," said Rice, referring to an agreement reached during the last round of six-party talks . N. Korea restarted its nuclear program when the U.S. failed to follow through with its agreement to take North Korea off the national list of state-sponsored terrorism supporters
Revised:  "We strongly urge the North to reconsider these steps and come back immediately into compliance with its obligations," said Rice, referring to an agreement reached during the last round of six-party talks . 
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Original: N. Korea restarted its nuclear program when the U.S. failed to follow through with its agreement to take North Korea off the national list of state-sponsored terrorism supporters.
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Original:  "We strongly urge the North to reconsider these steps and come back immediately into compliance with its obligations," said Rice, referring to an agreement reached during the last round of six-party talks  
Revised:  "We strongly urge the North to reconsider these steps and come back immediately into compliance with its obligations," said Rice, referring to an agreement reached during the last round of six-party talks . 
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Original: The incinerator was originally fired up in 2002 , but the collection was saved when a proposal to move the texts into a warehouse owned by Nils Christian Bang at Follum Grend, near Ringerike.
Revised: A planned incineration of them in 2002 , but the collection was saved when a proposal to move the texts into a warehouse owned by Nils Christian Bang at Follum Grend, near Ringerike.
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