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Original: Deputy Assistant Commissioner Sue Akers, head of the phone hacking inquiry  said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
Revised: Deputy Assistant Commissioner Sue Akers, head of the phone hacking inquiry , said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
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Original: A Scotland Yard officer has been arrested after allegations he leaked information from the News of the World phone-hacking investigation to The Guardian . Deputy Assistant Commissioner Sue Akers , head of the phone hacking inquiry, said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
Revised: A officer has been arrested after allegations he leaked information from the News of the World phone-hacking investigation to The Guardian . Deputy Assistant Commissioner Sue Akers , head of the phone hacking inquiry, said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
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Original: A Scotland Yard officer has been arrested after allegations he leaked information from the News of the World phone-hacking investigation to The Guardian . Deputy Assistant Commissioner Sue Akers , head of the phone hacking inquiry, said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
Revised: A Scotland Yard officer has been arrested after allegations he leaked information from the phone-hacking investigation to The Guardian . Deputy Assistant Commissioner Sue Akers , head of the phone hacking inquiry, said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
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Original: A Scotland Yard officer has been arrested after allegations he leaked information from the News of the World phone-hacking investigation to The Guardian . Deputy Assistant Commissioner Sue Akers , head of the phone hacking inquiry, said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
Revised: A Scotland Yard officer has been arrested after allegations he leaked information from the News of the World phone-hacking investigation to . Deputy Assistant Commissioner Sue Akers , head of the phone hacking inquiry, said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
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Original: A Scotland Yard officer has been arrested after allegations he leaked information from the News of the World phone-hacking investigation to The Guardian . Deputy Assistant Commissioner Sue Akers , head of the phone hacking inquiry, said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
Revised: A Scotland Yard officer has been arrested after allegations he leaked information from the News of the World phone-hacking investigation to The Guardian . Deputy Assistant Commissioner , head of the phone hacking inquiry, said "I made had made very clear the need for operational and information security.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Guardian News & Media, which publishes the Guardian, declined to comment, saying "We note the arrest of a Scotland Yard detective on suspicion of misconduct in a public office relating to unauthorized disclosure of information."
Revised:  A spokesperson for Guardian News & Media, which publishes The Guardian, declined to comment, saying "We note the arrest of a Scotland Yard detective on suspicion of misconduct in a public office relating to unauthorized disclosure of information."
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Original:  The 51-year-old detective constable was detained on suspicion of misconduct in a public office, and has been suspended by the Metropolitan police .
Revised:  The 51-year-old detective constable was detained on suspicion of misconduct in a public office, and has been suspended by the .
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Original:  A spokesperson for Guardian News Media , which publishes The Guardian, declined to comment, saying  "We note the arrest of a Scotland Yard detective on suspicion of misconduct in a public office relating to unauthorized disclosure of information."
Revised:  A spokesperson for Guardian News , which publishes The Guardian, declined to comment, saying "We note the arrest of a Scotland Yard detective on suspicion of misconduct in a public office relating to unauthorized disclosure of information."
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Original:  A spokesperson for Guardian News Media , which publishes The Guardian, declined to comment, saying  "We note the arrest of a Scotland Yard detective on suspicion of misconduct in a public office relating to unauthorized disclosure of information."
Revised:  A spokesperson for Guardian News Media , which publishes The Guardian, declined to comment, saying , "We note the arrest of a Scotland Yard detective on suspicion of misconduct in a public office relating to unauthorized disclosure of information."
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Original:  Operation Weeting is looking into illegal hacking by News of the World reporters of the voicemails of public figures.
Revised:  is looking into illegal hacking by News of the World reporters of the voicemails of public figures.
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Original: is looking into illegal hacking by News of the World reporters of the voicemails of public figures.
Revised: is investigating illegal hacking of voicemail messages by News of the World reporters of the voicemails of public figures.
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Original:   The detective is on bail until September 29
Revised:  The detective has been released on bail until September 29
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Original:  The world's leading social network platforms have been requested to attend a meeting at the United Kingdom's Home Office to discuss their role in the recent UK riots.
Revised:  Representatives of leading social network platforms have been requested to attend a meeting at the United Kingdom's Home Office to discuss their role in the recent UK riots.
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Original:  The world's leading social network platforms have been requested to attend a meeting at the United Kingdom's Home Office to discuss their role in the recent UK riots.
Revised:  The world's leading social network platforms have been asked to attend a meeting at the United Kingdom's Home Office to discuss their role in the recent UK riots.
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Original:  The meetingwhich has been scheduled for Thursday25 August comes after the online networks received criticism over the fact that some used their networks in attempts at further fueling the violence and looting that occurred earlier this month.
Revised:  The meeting, scheduled to take place on Thursday, comes after rioters used the networks to further fuel violence and looting that occurred earlier this month.
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Original:  Happy to attend the meeting, representatives from both and Blackberry have indicated that they will be present, however Twitter has yet to make a comment on whethere they will be there.
Revised:  Officials from Facebook have confirmed that they will be present, however Twitter has yet to make a comment on whethere they will be there.
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Original:  Happy to attend the meeting, representatives from both and Blackberry have indicated that they will be present, however Twitter has yet to make a comment on whethere they will be there.
Revised:  Happy to attend the meeting, representatives from both and Blackberry have indicated that they will be present, but Twitter has yet to make a comment on whethere they will be there.
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Original:  Happy to attend the meeting, representatives from both and Blackberry have indicated that they will be present, however Twitter has yet to make a comment on whethere they will be there.
Revised:  Happy to attend the meeting, representatives from both and Blackberry have indicated that they will be present, however Twitter has yet to indicate whether they will attend. has suggested that it might attend.
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Original:  The networks, which have being discussed after a series of individuals have been arrested and are now being charged for using online networking platforms as ways of encouraging others to riot .
Revised:  A series of individuals have been arrested and are now being charged for using online networking platforms as ways of encouraging others to riot .
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Original:  The networks, which have being discussed after a series of individuals have been arrested and are now being charged for using online networking platforms as ways of encouraging others to riot .
Revised:  The networks, which have being discussed after a series of individuals have been arrested and are now being charged for using online networking platforms to provoke riots .
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Original:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21  and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22  who last Wednesday were both sentenced to four years imprisonment each for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns although they were both unsuccessful .
Revised:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21 , and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22 who last Wednesday were both sentenced to four years imprisonment each for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns although they were both unsuccessful .
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Original:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21  and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22  who last Wednesday were both sentenced to four years imprisonment each for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns although they were both unsuccessful .
Revised:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21 and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22 , who last Wednesday were both sentenced to four years imprisonment each for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns although they were both unsuccessful .
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Original:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21  and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22  who last Wednesday were both sentenced to four years imprisonment each for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns although they were both unsuccessful .
Revised:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21 and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22 who last Wednesday were each sentenced to four years imprisonment each for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns although they were both unsuccessful .
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Original:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21  and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22  who last Wednesday were both sentenced to four years imprisonment each for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns although they were both unsuccessful .
Revised:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21 and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22 who last Wednesday were both sentenced to four years imprisonment for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns although they were both unsuccessful .
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Original:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21  and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22  who last Wednesday were both sentenced to four years imprisonment each for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns although they were both unsuccessful .
Revised:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21 and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan, 22 who last Wednesday were both sentenced to four years imprisonment each for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns , albeit unsuccessfully .
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Original:  The four year duration of their sentences have been considered the most serve punishment handed down to rioters as of yet with Judge Elgan Edwards who sentences them stating that he hoped they would serve as deterrents to others
Revised:  The four year duration of their sentences have been considered the most serve punishment handed down to rioters as of yet . Presiding over the case, Judge Elgan Edwards who sentences them stating that he hoped they would serve as deterrents to others
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Original:  The four year duration of their sentences have been considered the most serve punishment handed down to rioters as of yet with Judge Elgan Edwards who sentences them stating that he hoped they would serve as deterrents to others
Revised:  The four year duration of their sentences have been considered the most serve punishment handed down to rioters as of yet with Judge Elgan Edwards stated that he hoped they would serve as deterrents to others
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Original:  The four year duration of their sentences have been considered the most serve punishment handed down to rioters as of yet with Judge Elgan Edwards who sentences them stating that he hoped they would serve as deterrents to others
Revised:  The four year duration of their sentences have been considered the most serve punishment handed down to rioters as of yet with Judge Elgan Edwards who sentences them stating that he hoped the sentences would serve as deterrents to others
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Original:  The four year duration of their sentences have been considered the most serve punishment handed down to rioters as of yet with Judge Elgan Edwards who sentences them stating that he hoped they would serve as deterrents to others
Revised:  The four year duration of their sentences have been considered the most serve punishment handed down to rioters as of yet with Judge Elgan Edwards who sentences them stating that he hoped they would serve as deterrents to similar unrest
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Original:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21, and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan , 22, who last Wednesday were each sentenced to four years imprisonment for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns, albeit unsuccessfully .
Revised:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21, and Perry Sutcliffe-Keenan , 22, who last Wednesday were each sentenced to four years imprisonment for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns, albeit unsuccessfully .
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Original:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21, and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan , 22, who last Wednesday were each sentenced to four years imprisonment for using Facebook as a means of starting riots in their local towns, albeit unsuccessfully .
Revised:  Two of those already charged include Jordon Blackshaw, 21, and Perry Sutchliffe-Keenan , 22, who last Wednesday were each sentenced to four years imprisonment .
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Original: Thousands of demonstrators marched in London today over the tax affairs of Prime Minister which were revealed as part of the leak of the .
Revised: Thousands of demonstrators marched in today over the tax affairs of Prime Minister which were revealed as part of the leak of the .
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Original:  The protest started around 11:00 BST (UTC +1) on Whitehall opposite the police-guarded entrance to Downing Street , the Prime Minister's official residence.
Revised:  The protest started around 11:00 ( +1) on Whitehall opposite the police-guarded entrance to Downing Street , the Prime Minister's official residence.
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Original:  The protest started around 11:00 BST (UTC +1) on Whitehall opposite the police-guarded entrance to Downing Street , the Prime Minister's official residence.
Revised:  The protest started around 11:00 BST (UTC +1) on opposite the police-guarded entrance to Downing Street , the Prime Minister's official residence.
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Original:  The protest started around 11:00 BST (UTC +1) on Whitehall opposite the police-guarded entrance to Downing Street , the Prime Minister's official residence.
Revised:  The protest started around 11:00 BST (UTC +1) on Whitehall opposite the police-guarded entrance to , the Prime Minister's official residence.
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Original:  Around 11:29, the protest moved up Whitehall, past , along the Strand, passing by Aldwych and up Kingsway towards Holborn where the Conservative Party were holding their Spring Forum in the Grand Connaught Rooms hotel.
Revised:  Around 11:29, the protest moved up Whitehall, past , along the Strand, passing by Aldwych and up Kingsway towards Holborn where the were holding their Spring Forum in the Grand Connaught Rooms hotel.
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Original: The protest started around 11:00 (+1) on opposite the police-guarded entrance to , the Prime Minister's official residence.
Revised: The protest startled around 11:00 (+1) on opposite the police-guarded entrance to , the Prime Minister's official residence.
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Original: The protest startled around 11:00 (+1) on opposite the police-guarded entrance to , the Prime Minister's official residence.
Revised: The protest started around 11:00 (+1) on opposite the police-guarded entrance to , the Prime Minister's official residence.
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Original:  In response to the article Peñalosa quickly said that he never claimed he held a PhD degree and that it was a communication error with his political campaign team to what led them to include such claim in the political advertisements of his campaign for Mayor of Bogota.
Revised:  In response to the article Peñalosa quickly said that he never claimed he held a PhD degree and that it was a communication error with his political campaign team what led them to include such claim in the political advertisements of his campaign for Mayor of Bogota.
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Original:  Additionally, newspaper O Globo quoted Mr Peñalosa in September
Revised:  Additionally, newspaper quoted Mr Peñalosa in September
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Original: On Thursday, , the second biggest newspaper of , published an article by Juana Afanador and Carlos Carrillo, in which it they expose the current mayor of Bogotá, , for claiming to have completed a PhD degree in Public Administration at the .
Revised: On Thursday, , the second biggest newspaper of , published an article by Juana Afanador and Carlos Carrillo, exposing the current mayor of Bogotá, , for claiming to have completed a PhD degree in Public Administration at the .
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Original:  As it was revealed by Afanador and Carrillo , the library of the University of Paris II does not have a doctoral thesis written by Enrique Peñalosa.
Revised:  According to the report , the library of the University of Paris II does not have a doctoral thesis written by Enrique Peñalosa.
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Original:  In response to the article Peñalosa quickly said that he never claimed he held a PhD degree and that it was a communication error with his political campaign team what led them to include such claim in the political advertisements of his campaign for Mayor of Bogota.
Revised:  In response to the article Peñalosa quickly said that he never claimed he held a PhD degree and that a communication error with his political campaign team what led them to include such claim in the political advertisements of his campaign for Mayor of Bogota.
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Original:  In response to the article Peñalosa quickly said that he never claimed he held a PhD degree and that it was a communication error with his political campaign team what led them to include such claim in the political advertisements of his campaign for Mayor of Bogota.
Revised:  In response to the article Peñalosa quickly said that he never claimed he held a PhD degree and that it was a communication error with his political campaign team led them to include such claim in the political advertisements of his campaign for Mayor of Bogota.
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Original:  Afanador and Carrillo also identified two books written by the political leader which include a biography where he clearly states he holds a Doctorate in Public Administration from the University of Paris.
Revised:  The reporters also identified two books written by the political leader which include a biography where he clearly states he holds a Doctorate in Public Administration from the University of Paris.
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Original:  Additionally, newspaper quoted Mr Peñalosa in September
Revised:  newspaper quoted Mr Peñalosa in September
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Original: On Thursday,  , the second biggest newspaper of , published an article by Juana Afanador and Carlos Carrillo, exposing the current mayor of Bogotá, , for claiming to have completed a PhD degree in Public Administration at the .
Revised: On Thursday, , the second biggest newspaper of , , accused the current mayor of Bogotá, , for claiming to have completed a PhD degree in Public Administration at the .
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Original: On Thursday,  , the second biggest newspaper of , published an article by Juana Afanador and Carlos Carrillo, exposing the current mayor of Bogotá, , for claiming to have completed a PhD degree in Public Administration at the .
Revised: On Thursday, , the second biggest newspaper of , published an article by Juana Afanador and Carlos Carrillo, exposing the current mayor of Bogotá, , of falsely claiming to have completed a PhD degree in Public Administration at the .
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Original:  He added that he actually took a course called DESS in Public Administration from the University of Paris II which some people might have interpreted as a Doctorate.
Revised:  He added that he actually took a () in Public Administration from the University of Paris II which some people might have interpreted as a Doctorate.
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Original:  He added that he actually took a course called DESS in Public Administration from the University of Paris II which some people might have interpreted as a Doctorate.
Revised:  He added that he actually took a course called DESS in Public Administration from the University of Paris which some people might have interpreted as a Doctorate.
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Original:  In response to the article Peñalosa quickly said that he never claimed he held a PhD degree and that a communication error with his political campaign team led them to include such claim in the political advertisements of his campaign for Mayor of Bogota.
Revised:  In response to the article Peñalosa quickly said he never claimed he held a PhD degree and that a communication error with his political campaign team led them to include such claim in the political advertisements of his campaign for Mayor of Bogota.
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Original:  He added that he actually took a () in Public Administration from the University of Paris which some people might have interpreted as a Doctorate.
Revised:  He said he actually took a () in Public Administration from the University of Paris which some people might have interpreted as a Doctorate.
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Original:  The reporters also identified two books written by the political leader which include a biography where he clearly states he holds a Doctorate in Public Administration from the University of Paris.  newspaper quoted Mr Peñalosa in September
Revised:  The reporters also identified two books written by the political leader which include a biography where he clearly states he holds a Doctorate in Public Administration from the University of Paris. Additionally, newspaper quoted Mr Peñalosa in September
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Original: According to the report by Juana Afanador and Carlos Carrillo, the library of the University of Paris II does not have a doctoral thesis written by Enrique Peñalosa.
Revised: According to the report by Juana Afanador and Carlos Carrillo, the library of the does not have a doctoral thesis written by Enrique Peñalosa.
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Original: With the rebels within about 25 km of Tripoli, Gaddafi's clinch on power looks fragile.
Revised: With the rebels within about 25 km of Tripoli, Gaddafi's hold on power looks fragile.
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Original: A coordinated revolt that rebels had been secretly planning for months saw gunfire across Tripoli, instantly after Muslim clerics called people on to the streets.
Revised: A coordinated revolt that rebels had been secretly planning for months saw gunfire across Tripoli, instantly after Muslim clerics called people onto the streets.
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