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Original:  It is not known if Senator Landrieu noticed this work of engineering, nor if she had been briefed as to what was being done   .
Revised:  It is not known if Senator Landrieu noticed this work of engineering, nor if she had been briefed as to what was being done . .
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Original:  United States Geological Survey, by their part  reported the earthquake had a magnitude of 5.0.
Revised: The United States Geological Survey, by their part reported the earthquake had a magnitude of 5.0.
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Original:  United States Geological Survey, by their part  reported the earthquake had a magnitude of 5.0.
Revised:  United States Geological Survey, by their part , reported the earthquake had a magnitude of 5.0.
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Original:  and 405 kilometers southeast of Athens  
Revised:  and 405 kilometers southeast of Athens . 
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Original:  A magnitude 5.4 earthquake hit the island of Crete in Greece on Sunday morning, the European-Mediterranean Seismological Centre reported.
Revised:  An earthquake hit the island of Crete in Greece on Sunday morning, the European-Mediterranean Seismological Centre reported.
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Original:  A magnitude 5.4 earthquake hit the island of Crete in Greece on Sunday morning, the European-Mediterranean Seismological Centre reported.
Revised:  A magnitude 5.4 earthquake hit the island of Crete in Greece on Sunday morning, it has been reported. The European-Mediterranean Seismological Centre reported.
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Original:  The earthquake took place at 18:21:01 local time (15:21:01 UTC) ,  at a depth of 28.8 kilometers.
Revised:  The earthquake took place at 18:21:01 local time (15:21:01 UTC) . at a depth of 28.8 kilometers.
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Original:  An earthquake hit the island of Crete in Greece on Sunday morning , it has been reported .
Revised:  An earthquake hit the island of Crete in Greece on Sunday morning .
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Original: The United States Geological Survey  reported that the earthquake had a magnitude of 5.0, and that it occurred at a depth of 28.8 kilometers.
Revised: The United States Geological Survey (USGS) reported that the earthquake had a magnitude of 5.0, and that it occurred at a depth of 28.8 kilometers.
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Original:  United States Geological Survey noted that an aftershock occurred at 15:35:36, with a magnitude of 4.4, at a depth of 35 kilometers
Revised:  USGS noted that an aftershock occurred at 15:35:36, with a magnitude of 4.4, at a depth of 35 kilometers
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Original: Refugees from New Orleans arrived on Sunday and have continued to come to Utah, utilizing the facilities at Camp Williams, the training facility for the Utah National Guard, to house the incoming people.
Revised: Evacuees from New Orleans arrived on Sunday and have continued to come to Utah, utilizing the facilities at Camp Williams, the training facility for the Utah National Guard, to house the incoming people.
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Original:  Flights from New Orleans to Salt Lake City International Airport provided by Jet Blue Airlines under a contract from FEMA have been shuttling people from New Orleans to many destinations throughout the United States, including Utah.
Revised:  Flights from New Orleans to Salt Lake City International Airport provided by JetBlue Airways under a contract from FEMA have been shuttling people from New Orleans to many destinations throughout the United States, including Utah.
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Original:   Governor John Huntsman, Jr. utilized surplus state funds  to begin efforts to house and clothe people coming to Utah, however some of this will  be reimbursed by the Federal Government at a later date.
Revised:  Governor John Huntsman, Jr. utilized surplus state funds to begin efforts housing and clothing people coming to Utah, however some of this will be reimbursed by the Federal Government at a later date.
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Original:   Governor John Huntsman, Jr. utilized surplus state funds  to begin efforts to house and clothe people coming to Utah, however some of this will  be reimbursed by the Federal Government at a later date.
Revised:  Governor John Huntsman, Jr. utilized surplus state funds to begin efforts to house and clothe people coming to Utah, however some of this will likely be reimbursed by the Federal Government at a later date.
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Original:  He announced that Utah was willing to take up to 1,000 people at shelters in Utah, however that amount was later increased to  2,      000    
Revised:  He announced that Utah was willing to take up to 1,000 people at shelters in Utah, and that amount was later increased to 2, 000 
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Original:  He announced that Utah was willing to take up to 1,000 people at shelters in Utah, however that amount was later increased to  2,      000    
Revised:  He announced that Utah was willing to take up to 1,000 people at shelters in Utah, however that amount was later increased to over 2, 000 
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Original:  Evacuees from New Orleans arrived on Sunday and have continued to come to Utah, utilizing the facilities at Camp Williams, the training facility for the Utah National Guard, to house the incoming people.
Revised: right Evacuees from New Orleans arrived on Sunday and have continued to come to Utah, utilizing the facilities at Camp Williams, the training facility for the Utah National Guard, to house the incoming people.
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Original: right Evacuees from New Orleans arrived on Sunday and have continued to come to Utah, utilizing the facilities at Camp Williams, the training facility for the Utah National Guard, to house the incoming people.
Revised:  Evacuees from New Orleans arrived on Sunday and have continued to come to Utah, utilizing the facilities at Camp Williams, the training facility for the Utah National Guard, to house the incoming people.
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Original: A Yakovlev Yak-42 A  passenger plane flying the Moscow to Grozny  was forced to make an emergency diversion to Volgograd due to an anonymous call about a bomb threat.
Revised: A Yakovlev Yak-42 A passenger plane flying the Moscow to Grozny route was forced to make an emergency diversion to Volgograd due to an anonymous call about a bomb threat.
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Original:  The plane was a Yakovlev Yak-42 and was carrying 73 passengers at the time of the incident.
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Original:  Several minutes into the flight the crew received a call which stated the the plane experience detonation at any minute according to a spokesman from the Russian Federal Air Transport Agency.
Revised:  Several minutes into the flight the crew received a call which stated the the plane experience detonation at any minute 
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Original:  Roush Fenway Racing driver Greg Biffle  won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Price Chopper 400 after qualifying fifth .
Revised:  Roush Fenway Racing driver Greg Biffle , who qualified fifth, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Price Chopper 400 after qualifying fifth .
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Original: A small Cessna 301 general aviation plane has reportedly crashed near the airport in Catalina Island.
Revised: A small Cessna 301 general aviation plane has crashed near the airport in Catalina Island.
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Original: A small Cessna 301 general aviation plane has reportedly crashed near the airport in Catalina Island.
Revised: A small Cessna 301 general aviation plane has reportedly crashed near the airport on Catalina Island.
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Original:  It is not yet know what has caused the accident .
Revised:  The cause is yet unknown .
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Original:  At about 3:30 local time it was reported that a Cessna 301 plane had crashed near Avalon in Catalina Island.
Revised:  At around 3:30 local time it was reported that a Cessna 301 plane had crashed near Avalon in Catalina Island.
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Original:  The cause is yet unknown .
Revised:  It has been reported that the plane encountered a single engine failure. The cause of the engine failure has not yet been determined .
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Original: A small Cessna 301 general aviation plane has crashed near the airport on Catalina Island .
Revised: A small Cessna 301 general aviation plane has crashed near the airport on Santa Catalina Island, California .
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Original: A group of 19 people, including local aboriginies and Roads and Traffic Authority (RTA) staff, were sprayed by a crop duster  today.
Revised: A group of 19 people, including local aborigines and Roads and Traffic Authority (RTA) staff, were sprayed by a crop duster today.
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Original:  ABC Online is reporting that the pilot of the plane may face charges
Revised:  ABC Online reports that the pilot of the plane may face charges
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Original:  "He was rescued by a neighbour after five days stranded in his house and he's been in a nursing home in Lafayette, Louisiana," said Alexander Downer, Minister for Foreign Affairs.
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Original:  The    Australian Department of Foreign Affairs has been criticised for the lack of support provided to Australian victims of the disaster.
Revised:  The The Australian Department of Foreign Affairs has been criticised for the lack of support provided to Australian victims of the disaster.
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Original: A 1987 Dodge Ram Wagon church van registered to the Tabernacle of Deliverance and Prayer , flipped over on a highway in southwest Georgia yesterday killing four and injuring thirteen.
Revised: A 1987 Dodge Ram Wagon van registered to the Tabernacle of Deliverance and Prayer , flipped over on a highway in southwest Georgia yesterday killing four and injuring thirteen.
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Original: A 1987 Dodge Ram Wagon church van registered to the Tabernacle of Deliverance and Prayer , flipped over on a highway in southwest Georgia yesterday killing four and injuring thirteen.
Revised: A 1987 Dodge Ram Wagon church van registered to the Tabernacle of Deliverance and Prayer flipped over on a highway in southwest Georgia yesterday killing four and injuring thirteen.
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Original:  The van laden with seventeen passengers  was heading south on Highway 27 when the tire punctured causing the driver to lose control and crash into the median subsequently the vehicle rolled over several times at about 6:45 local time.
Revised:  The van , with seventeen passengers was heading south on Highway 27 when the tire punctured causing the driver to lose control and crash into the median subsequently the vehicle rolled over several times at about 6:45 local time.
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Original:  The van laden with seventeen passengers  was heading south on Highway 27 when the tire punctured causing the driver to lose control and crash into the median subsequently the vehicle rolled over several times at about 6:45 local time.
Revised:  The van laden with seventeen passengers , was heading south on Highway 27 when the tire punctured causing the driver to lose control and crash into the median subsequently the vehicle rolled over several times at about 6:45 local time.
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Original:  The van laden with seventeen passengers  was heading south on Highway 27 when the tire punctured causing the driver to lose control and crash into the median subsequently the vehicle rolled over several times at about 6:45 local time.
Revised:  The van laden with seventeen passengers was heading south on Highway 27 when the tire punctured causing the driver to lose control and crash into the median ; it then rolled over several times at about 6:45 local time.
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Original:  According to The Atlanta Journal-Constitution at the time of the accident the van was overloaded and was heading to Florida.
Revised:  According to The Atlanta Journal-Constitution at the time of the accident the van was overloaded and heading to Florida.
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Original:  Also the severity of the injuries sustained are unknown, but it is reported that some of the passengers were taken to the hospital
Revised:  Also the severity of the injuries sustained is unknown, but it is reported that some of the passengers were taken to the hospital
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Original:  Also the severity of the injuries sustained are unknown, but it is reported that some of the passengers were taken to the hospital
Revised:  Also the severity of the injuries sustained are unknown, but it is reported that some of the passengers were hospitalised
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Original: A   1987 Dodge Ram Wagon van registered to the Tabernacle of Deliverance and Prayer flipped over on a highway in southwest Georgia yesterday killing four and injuring thirteen.
Revised: A A 1987 Dodge Ram Wagon van registered to the Tabernacle of Deliverance and Prayer flipped over on a highway in southwest Georgia yesterday killing four and injuring thirteen.
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Original: According to The Atlanta Journal-Constitution , at the time of the accident the van was overloaded and heading to Florida.
Revised: According to The Atlanta Journal-Constitution at the time of the accident the van was overloaded and heading to Florida.
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Original:  Two teenagers — a boy age 19 and a girl age 13 — are among the dead.
Revised:  Two teenagers — a boy of nineteen and a girl age 13 — are among the dead.
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Original:  Two teenagers — a boy age 19 and a girl age 13 — are among the dead.
Revised:  Two teenagers — a boy age 19 and a girl of thirteen — are among the dead.
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Original: A fire Monday night in a theatre in Beni Suef, Egypt, saw at least 32 dead and a similar number injured .
Revised: A fire Monday night in a theatre in Beni Suef, Egypt, has killed at least 32 dead and a similar number injured .
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Original: A fire Monday night in a theatre in Beni Suef, Egypt, saw at least 32 dead and a similar number injured .
Revised: A fire Monday night in a theatre in Beni Suef, Egypt, saw at least 32 and injured a similar number injured .
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Original: A fire Monday night in a theatre in Beni Suef, Egypt, saw at least 32 dead and a similar number injured .
Revised: A fire Monday night in a theatre in Beni Suef, Egypt, saw at least 32 dead and a similar number .
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Original:  This occurred on the third day of a nine-day theatre festival , with groups from all over Egypt , being held in the farming community .
Revised:  This occurred on the third day of a nine-day theatre festival in the farming community, featuring groups from all over Egypt , being held in the farming community .
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Original:  This occurred on the third day of a nine-day theatre festival , with groups from all over Egypt , being held in the farming community .
Revised:  This occurred on the third day of a nine-day theatre festival , with groups from all over Egypt .
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Original:  The other exit was covered in the same paperas the stage and was in flames before it could be used.
Revised:  The other exit was covered in paper, as was the stage, and caught fire before it could be used.
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Original:  The other exit was covered in paper , as was the stage, and caught fire before it could be used.
Revised:  The other exit was covered in paper and caught fire before it could be used.
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Original:   It is believed most of the dead died due to burns, smoke inhalation and injuries during the stampede ;
Revised:  It is believed most of the deaths were caused by burns, smoke inhalation and injuries during the stampede ;
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Original:  A medical team specialising in burns and related care has been flown in from Cairo, and Cairo hospitals have acknowledged their readiness to accept patients if necessary.
Revised:  A medical team specialising in burns and related care has been flown in from Cairo, and Cairo hospitals have indicated that they are ready to accept patients if necessary.
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Original:  Beni Suef is 120km from Cairo .
Revised:  Beni Suef is 120km from Cairo 
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Original:  Firefighters brought the fire under control, but not before the building was destroyed
Revised:  , which featured groups from all over Egypt
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Original: There was a stampede as the panicking audience of at least 100 rushed for the only available exit door, which was blocked at one stage by falling supports as the building slowly burnt.
Revised: There was a stampede as the panicking audience of at least 100 rushed for the only available exit door, which was blocked at one point by falling supports as the building slowly burnt.
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Original:  It is believed most of the deaths were caused by burns, smoke inhalation and injuries during the stampede.
Revised:  It is believed the deaths were caused by burns, smoke inhalation and injuries during the stampede.
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Original:  It is believed most of the deaths were caused by burns, smoke inhalation and injuries during the stampede.
Revised:  It is believed most of the deaths were caused by burns, smoke inhalation and injuries from the stampede.
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Original:  The fire occurred on the third day of a nine-day theatre festival in the farming community, 120km from Cairo, which featured groups from all over Egypt
Revised:  The fire occurred on the third day of a nine-day theatre festival in the farming community, 120 km from Cairo, which featured groups from all over Egypt
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Original:  Accardo is survived by his wife, Anne, his mother, a brother and a sister, and eight nieces and nephews  
Revised:  Accardo is survived by his wife, Anne, his mother, a brother and a sister, and eight nieces and nephews . 
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Original:  According to Chicago Breaking News a Police news affairs officer Daniel O'Brien said that a suspicious package was found near railway tracks in the vicinity at about noon.
Revised:  According to Chicago Breaking News a package was found near railway tracks in the vicinity at about noon.
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Original:  As a precaution the police have evacuated the Randolph School and the South Side Occupational Academy high school  .
Revised:  As a precaution the Randolph School and the South Side Occupational Academy high school .
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Original:  As a precaution the police have evacuated the Randolph School and the South Side Occupational Academy high school  .
Revised:  As a precaution the police have evacuated the Randolph School and the South Side Occupational Academy high school were evacuated .
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Original:  It is unclear whether the package had been detonated, although no injuries have been reported
Revised:  The bomb and arson unit later detonated the package and issued the all clear at around 3:45 p.m. local time, no injuries were reported as a result of the incident. The police are still trying to determine how the explosives reached the area
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Original: Map showing Chicago Officials from the Chicago, Illinois bomb squad and arson squad were earlier  a suspicious package found near two Chicago schools which forced their evacuation.
Revised: Map showing Chicago Officials from the Chicago, Illinois bomb squad and arson squad were earlier investigating a suspicious package found near two Chicago schools which forced their evacuation.
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Original: A  school bus photo A school bus, laden with 14 students from the Temple High School, crashed in Georgia  earlier today on Highway 113 southbound  killing one student and leaving a dozen more injured.
Revised: A school bus photo A school bus, laden with 14 students from the Temple High School, crashed in Georgia earlier today on Highway 113 southbound , killing one student and leaving a dozen more injured.
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Original:  According to the Carol County Schools Superintendent  one student was killed and a dozen others were in need of medical care after the bus rolled over.
Revised:  According to the Carroll County Schools Superintendent one student was killed and a dozen others were in need of medical care after the bus rolled over.
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Original:  According to the Carol County Schools Superintendent  one student was killed and a dozen others were in need of medical care after the bus rolled over.
Revised:  According to the Carol County Schools Superintendent , one student was killed and a dozen others were in need of medical care after the bus rolled over.
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Original: A typical US school bus photo A school bus, laden with 14 students from the Temple High School  , crashed in Georgia, United States, earlier today on Georgia State Route 113  southbound, killing one student and leaving a dozen more injured.
Revised: A typical US school bus photo A school bus, with fourteen students from the Temple High School , crashed in Georgia, United States, earlier today on Georgia State Route 113 southbound, killing one student and leaving a dozen more injured.
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Original: A typical US school bus photo A school bus, laden with 14 students from the Temple High School  , crashed in Georgia, United States, earlier today on Georgia State Route 113  southbound, killing one student and leaving a dozen more injured.
Revised: A typical US school bus photo A school bus, laden with 14 students from the Temple High School , crashed in Georgia, United States, earlier today on Georgia State Route 113 going southbound, killing one student and leaving a dozen more injured.
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Original:  A spokesman for the mayor and a highway patrolman also confirmed that a student was killed .
Revised:  A spokesman for the mayor and a highway patrolman also confirmed that a student died .
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Original:  It is reported that the bus was heading southbound on the highway when the driver lost control and drove into a ditch, which caused the bus to overturn . People on the scene reported that the bus flipped multiple times before coming to a halt.
Revised:  It is reported that the bus was heading southbound on the highway when the driver lost control and drove into a ditch, which caused the bus to turn over . People on the scene reported that the bus flipped multiple times before coming to a halt.
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Original:  It is reported that the bus was heading southbound on the highway when the driver lost control and drove into a ditch, which caused the bus to overturn . People on the scene reported that the bus flipped multiple times before coming to a halt.
Revised:  It is reported that the bus was heading southbound on the highway when the driver lost control and drove into a ditch, which caused the bus to overturn . Witnesses reported the bus flipped multiple times before coming to a halt.
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Original:  The six injured were taken to the Tanner Medical Center and the Higgins Hospital, among them are the 45-year old female bus driver.
Revised:  The six injured were taken to the Tanner Medical Center and the Higgins Hospital, among them was the 45-year-old female bus driver.
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Original: A typical US school bus photo A school bus, with fourteen students from the Temple High School aboard, crashed in Georgia, United States, earlier today on Georgia State Route 113 going southbound, killing one student and leaving a dozen more injured.
Revised: A typical US school bus A school bus, with fourteen students from the Temple High School aboard, crashed in Georgia, United States, earlier today on Georgia State Route 113 going southbound, killing one student and leaving a dozen more injured.
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Original: The remaining members of the Expedition 25 crew will launch to the International Space Station on Thursday at 7:10 pm EDT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome, which will return the station to its full complement of 6 persons.
Revised: The remaining members of the Expedition 25 crew are set to launch to the International Space Station on Thursday at 7:10 pm EDT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome, which will return the station to its full complement of 6 persons.
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