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Original: Western Australian Minister for Energy Fran Logan said that residential supplies were unlikely to be affect but has called on Western Australians to conserve the use of Natural gas.
Revised: Western Australian Minister for Energy Fran Logan said that residential supplies were unlikely to be affected but has called on Western Australians to conserve the use of Natural gas.
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Original:  153 employees have been evacuated , 13 employees remain on the island to monitor the situation.
Revised:  153 employees have been evacuated and 13 employees remain on the island to monitor the situation.
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Original:  Western Australian Minister for Energy Fran Logan said that residential supplies were unlikely to be affected but has called on Western Australians to conserve the use of Natural gas.
Revised:  Western Australian Minister for Energy Fran Logan said that residential supplies were unlikely to be affected but has called on Western Australians to conserve the use of natural gas.
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Original:  Minister Logan said that Apache supply primarily large volume users like to Alinta Gas and Alcoa  and the major industrial users will be hit the hardest.
Revised:  Minister Logan said that Apache supplies primarily large volume users like to Alinta Gas and Alcoa and the major industrial users will be hit the hardest.
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Original:  Minister Logan said that Apache supply primarily large volume users like to Alinta Gas and Alcoa  and the major industrial users will be hit the hardest.
Revised:  Minister Logan said that Apache supply primarily large volume users like Alinta Gas and Alcoa and the major industrial users will be hit the hardest.
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Original:  Minister Logan said that Apache supply primarily large volume users like to Alinta Gas and Alcoa  and the major industrial users will be hit the hardest.
Revised:  Minister Logan said that Apache supply primarily large volume users like to Alinta Gas and Alcoa , and the major industrial users will be hit the hardest.
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Original:  Apache representatives  including its managing director Tim Wall and fire experts from Singapore  are heading to the site to extinguish the fire and assess the damage.
Revised:  Apache representatives , including its managing director Tim Wall and fire experts from Singapore are heading to the site to extinguish the fire and assess the damage.
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Original:  Apache representatives  including its managing director Tim Wall and fire experts from Singapore  are heading to the site to extinguish the fire and assess the damage.
Revised:  Apache representatives including its managing director Tim Wall and fire experts from Singapore , are heading to the site to extinguish the fire and assess the damage.
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Original:  Apache has also declared a clause in its supply contracts to remove liability for unavoidable catastrophes that prevent them from fulfilling obligations under the contrac
Revised:  Apache has also declared a clause in its supply contracts to remove liability for unavoidable catastrophes that prevent them from fulfilling obligations under the contract
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Original:  Apache has also declared a clause in its supply contracts to remove liability for unavoidable catastrophes that prevent them from fulfilling obligations under the contract
Revised:  Apache has invoked a clause in its supply contracts to remove liability for unavoidable catastrophes that prevent them from fulfilling obligations under the contract
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Original: Agata Mróz  , who together with Poland's national team won  European women's volleyball championships in 2003 and 2005, died on June 4 in a Wrocław hospital just two weeks after a bone marrow transplant intended to treat her progressing illness.
Revised: Agata Mróz , who together with Poland's national team won the European women's volleyball championships in 2003 and 2005, died on June 4 in a Wrocław hospital just two weeks after a bone marrow transplant intended to treat her progressing illness.
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Original:  Her club career had been equally successful, with two Polish and one Spanish championships under her belt  
Revised:  Her club career had been equally successful, with two Polish and one Spanish championships under her belt . 
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Original:  The decision is open to appeal within three days of the sending of the decision.  
Revised:  The decision is open to appeal within three days of the sending of the decision. " 
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Original: The UEFA Control and Disciplinary Body has decided that FC Porto will not participate in next season's UEFA Champions League after it's bribery scandal.
Revised: The Control and Disciplinary Body has decided that FC Porto will not participate in next season's UEFA Champions League after it's bribery scandal.
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Original: The UEFA Control and Disciplinary Body has decided that FC Porto will not participate in next season's UEFA Champions League after it's bribery scandal.
Revised: The UEFA Control and Disciplinary Body has decided that FC Porto will not participate in next season's UEFA after its bribery scandal.
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Original:  FC Porto were also deducted 6 points and received a fine of €150,000 by the disciplinary committee of the Professional Portuguese Football League for the same incidents
Revised:  FC Porto were also deducted 6 points and received a fine of €150,000 by the disciplinary committee of the for the same incidents
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Original: In the "TAITRA ICT 5-Stars Press Conference", Walter Yeh, Vice President of Taiwan External Trade Development Council  talked to Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen about "Design", he said: "We [the TAITRA] did a good attempt on setting 'iF Design Award Pavilion' at 2007 TAITRONICS (  Taipei International Electronics Show) and it [the pavilion] was highly respected by several industry not only the design [industry].
Revised: In the "TAITRA ICT 5-Stars Press Conference", Walter Yeh, Vice President of Taiwan External Trade Development Council , talked to Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen about "Design", he said: "We [the TAITRA] did a good attempt on setting 'iF Design Award Pavilion' at 2007 TAITRONICS ( Taipei International Electronics Show) and it [the pavilion] was highly respected by several industry not only the design [industry].
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Original: In the "TAITRA ICT 5-Stars Press Conference", Walter Yeh, Vice President of Taiwan External Trade Development Council  talked to Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen about "Design", he said: "We [the TAITRA] did a good attempt on setting 'iF Design Award Pavilion' at 2007 TAITRONICS (  Taipei International Electronics Show) and it [the pavilion] was highly respected by several industry not only the design [industry].
Revised: In the "TAITRA ICT 5-Stars Press Conference", Walter Yeh, Vice President of Taiwan External Trade Development Council talked to Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen about "Design", he said: "We [the TAITRA] did a good attempt on setting 'iF Design Award Pavilion' at 2007 TAITRONICS ( a.k.a Taipei International Electronics Show) and it [the pavilion] was highly respected by several industry not only the design [industry].
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Original: In the "TAITRA ICT 5-Stars Press Conference", Walter Yeh, Vice President of Taiwan External Trade Development Council  talked to Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen about "Design", he said: "We [the TAITRA] did a good attempt on setting 'iF Design Award Pavilion' at 2007 TAITRONICS (  Taipei International Electronics Show) and it [the pavilion] was highly respected by several industry not only the design [industry].
Revised: In the "TAITRA ICT 5-Stars Press Conference", Walter Yeh, Vice President of Taiwan External Trade Development Council talked to Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen about "Design", he said: "We [the TAITRA] did a good attempt on setting 'iF Design Award Pavilion' at 2007 TAITRONICS ( Taipei International Electronics Show) and it [the pavilion] was highly respected by several industries not only the design [industry].
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Original:  This year, we'll still promote this excellent tradition on  this pavilion to market the design of Taiwan into the world.
Revised:  This year, we'll still keep this excellent tradition on this pavilion to market the design of Taiwan into the world.
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Original:  This year, we'll still promote this excellent tradition on  this pavilion to market the design of Taiwan into the world.
Revised:  This year, we'll still promote this excellent tradition on setting this pavilion to market the design of Taiwan into the world.
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Original:  In addition, we invited several world-class juries from vast fields to keep several innovation awards more fair and professional in every Taipei Trade Shows, a good example is the 'COMPUTEX 2008 d & i Award'."
Revised:  In addition, we invited several world-class juries from vast fields to keep several innovation awards more fair and professional in every Taipei Trade Shows, a typical example is the 'COMPUTEX 2008 d & i Award'."
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Original:  As a result, the growth of design industry will pulse the future of the other industries  
Revised:  As a result, the growth of design industry will pulse the future of the other industries . 
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Original:  To promote the design of Taiwan into the world, not only pavilions from the Taiwan Excellence Gold & Silver Awards, d & i Award of COMPUTEX, Best Choice of COMPUTEX, and Taiwan Design  Pavilion, the TDC & TAITRA also held the "Design Think Forum" today to examine and forecast the design industry in Taiwan  .
Revised:  To promote the design of Taiwan into the world, not only pavilions from the Taiwan Excellence Gold & Silver Awards, d & i Award of COMPUTEX, Best Choice of COMPUTEX, and Taiwan Design Pavilion, the TDC & TAITRA also held the "Design Think Forum" to examine and forecast the design industry in Taiwan .
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Original:  Not only the "iF Design Award Pavilion" will be set at TAITRONICS 2008, 2008 the 2nd Taiwan International Culture and Creative Industries Exhibition (a.  .a Creative Taiwan), which will be showcased at Taipei World Trade Center  , will be a critical trade show for cultural, design, and creative industry .
Revised:  Not only the "iF Design Award Pavilion" will be set at TAITRONICS 2008, 2008 the 2nd Taiwan International Culture and Creative Industries Exhibition (a. k .a Creative Taiwan), which will be showcased at Taipei World Trade Center , will be a critical trade show for cultural, design, and creative industry .
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Original:  Not only the "iF Design Award Pavilion" will be set at TAITRONICS 2008, 2008 the 2nd Taiwan International Culture and Creative Industries Exhibition (a.  .a Creative Taiwan), which will be showcased at Taipei World Trade Center  , will be a critical trade show for cultural, design, and creative industry .
Revised:  Not only the "iF Design Award Pavilion" will be set at TAITRONICS 2008, 2008 the 2nd Taiwan International Culture and Creative Industries Exhibition (a. .a Creative Taiwan), which will be showcased at Taipei World Trade Center , will be a critical trade show for cultural, design, and creative industries .
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Original:  This year of COMPUTEX Taipei showcased not only vast ICT products but also innovative designs.
Revised:  This year 's COMPUTEX Taipei showcased not only vast ICT products but also innovative designs.
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Original:  This year of COMPUTEX Taipei showcased not only vast ICT products but also innovative designs.
Revised:  This year of COMPUTEX Taipei showcased vast ICT products but also innovative designs.
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Original:  This year of COMPUTEX Taipei showcased not only vast ICT products but also innovative designs.
Revised:  This year of COMPUTEX Taipei showcased not only vast ICT products and innovative designs.
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Original:   The tape contains a conversation between Harper and Vancouver journalist Tom Zytaruk, whose book "Like a Rock: The Chuck Cadman Story" claims that Conservative party officials had offered a  $ 1-million life insurance policy to Cadman in exchange for a key swing vote against the Liberal party, one of Canada's other main political parties.
Revised:  The tape contains a conversation between Harper and Vancouver journalist Tom Zytaruk, whose book "Like a Rock: The Chuck Cadman Story" claims that Conservative party officials had offered a C $ 1-million life insurance policy to Cadman in exchange for a key swing vote against the Liberal party, one of Canada's other main political parties.
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Original:   The tape contains a conversation between Harper and Vancouver journalist Tom Zytaruk, whose book "Like a Rock: The Chuck Cadman Story" claims that Conservative party officials had offered a  $ 1-million life insurance policy to Cadman in exchange for a key swing vote against the Liberal party, one of Canada's other main political parties.
Revised:  The tape contains a conversation between Harper and Vancouver journalist Tom Zytaruk, whose book "Like a Rock: The Chuck Cadman Story" claims that Conservative party officials had offered a $ 1 million life insurance policy to Cadman in exchange for a key swing vote against the Liberal party, one of Canada's other main political parties.
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Original: A 2005 recording of Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper discussing "financial considerations" offered to the late Member of Parliament (MP) Chuck Cadman has now been deemed "doctored" by the Canadian Conservative party .
Revised: A 2005 recording of Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper discussing "financial considerations" offered to the late Member of Parliament (MP) Chuck Cadman has now been deemed "doctored" by the Conservative Party of Canada .
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Original:  Stephen Harper The tape contains a conversation between Harper and Vancouver journalist Tom Zytaruk, whose book "Like a Rock: The Chuck Cadman Story" claims that Conservative party officials had offered a C$1 million life insurance policy to Cadman in exchange for a key swing vote against the Liberal party , one of Canada's other main political parties.
Revised:  Stephen Harper The tape contains a conversation between Harper and Vancouver journalist Tom Zytaruk, whose book "Like a Rock: The Chuck Cadman Story" claims that Conservative party officials had offered a C$1 million life insurance policy to Cadman in exchange for a key swing vote against the Liberal Party , one of Canada's other main political parties.
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Original: A 2005 recording of Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper discussing "financial considerations" offered to the late Member of Parliament (MP) Chuck Cadman has now been deemed "doctored" by the Conservative Party of Canada .
Revised: A 2005 recording of Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper discussing "financial considerations" offered to the late Member of Parliament (MP) Chuck Cadman to have been "doctored" by the Conservative Party of Canada .
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Original: A 2005 recording of Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper discussing "financial considerations" offered to the late Member of Parliament (MP) Chuck Cadman has now been deemed "doctored" by the Conservative Party of Canada .
Revised: A 2005 recording of Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper discussing "financial considerations" offered to the late Member of Parliament (MP) Chuck Cadman has now been deemed "doctored" .
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Original:  President Robert Mugabe is the incumbent   
Revised:  President Robert Mugabe is the incumbent . 
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Original:  Mugabe is currently in Rome, Italy for the United Nations World Food Summit  
Revised:  Mugabe is currently in Rome, Italy for the United Nations World Food Summit . 
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Original:  Image:Mugabecloseup2008.jpg|Robert Mugabe (ZANU-PF) at a African Union summit in Ethiopia in 2008 President Mugabe disputed the reports as concocted by the MDC to curry favor internationally.
Revised:  President Mugabe disputed the reports as concocted by the MDC to curry favor internationally.
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Original:  The braclets were stolen from a pawn shopand are now back on shelves . URL Category:Wackyne
Revised:  The braclets were stolen from a pawn shopand are now back on shelves . Category:Wackyne
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Original:  The pawn shop, however, must continue to do business with her, as she had pwned several items which have not yet been sold
Revised:  The pawn shop, however, must continue to do business with her, as she had pawned several items which have not yet been sold
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Original:  She responded  " fine, you can search me  " ;
Revised:  She responded , " fine, you can search me " ;
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Original:  She responded  " fine, you can search me  " ;
Revised:  She responded " You can search me " ;
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Original:  She responded  " fine, you can search me  " ;
Revised:  She responded " fine, you can search me . " ;
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Original:  It was  clear who the thief was after the shop reviewed the surveillance footage.
Revised:  It was only clear who the thief was after the shop reviewed the surveillance footage.
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Original:  The actions come in the wake of an investigation by the Federal Communications Commision (FCC), over whether Comcast had restricted some customers from sharing videos, music, and similar files.
Revised:  The actions come in the wake of an investigation by the Federal Communications Commission (FCC), over whether Comcast had restricted some customers from sharing videos, music, and similar files.
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Original:  Free Press, an advocacy group that pushes for better oversight of cable operators such as Comcast, stated that the Comcast practices were discriminatory towards users of the  technology.
Revised:  Free Press, an advocacy group that pushes for better oversight of cable operators such as Comcast, stated that Comcast practices were discriminatory towards users of the technology.
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Original:  Comcast and w: Time Warner Cable, two of the largest ISPs in North America, both made separate announcements of their plans.
Revised:  Comcast and Time Warner Cable, two of the largest ISPs in North America, both made separate announcements of their plans.
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Original: Comcast's tests are expected to begin in Chambersburg, Pennsylvania , and w:Warrenton, Virginia.
Revised: Comcast's tests are expected to begin in Chambersburg, Pennsylvania and w:Warrenton, Virginia.
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Original:  They will meter and bill clients, charging more money for faster speeds and larger amounts of transmitted data, functioning more like a traditional public utility, such  an electric company or cell phone service.
Revised:  They will meter and bill clients, charging more money for faster speeds and larger amounts of transmitted data, functioning more like a traditional public utility, such as an electric company or cell phone service.
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Original:  Time Warner Cable's most expensive offering, $54.90, comes with 15 megabytes of data transfer speed and a 40 gigabyte limit on total data transfer.
Revised:  Time Warner Cable's most expensive offering, $54.90, comes with 15 megabits of data transfer speed and a 40 gigabyte limit on total data transfer.
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Original:  Time Warner Cable's most expensive offering, $54.90, comes with 15 megabits of data transfer speed and a 40 gigabyte limit on total data transfer.
Revised:  Time Warner Cable's most expensive offering, $54.90, comes with 15 megabits-per-second of data transfer speed and a 40 gigabyte limit on total data transfer.
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Original: According to Roger Entner, a senior vice president from Nielsen IAG, that as little as 5 percent of all Internet users may consume as much as 50 percent of all the bandwidth on the Internet.
Revised: According to Roger Entner, a senior vice president from Nielsen IAG, as little as 5 percent of all Internet users may consume as much as 50 percent of all the bandwidth on the Internet.
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Original: 400px|none| Map of the European Union by the Commission Supporters say that it will unify Europe, break down internal barriers, and give the EU more strategic power in the world against American interests and other growing international alliances.
Revised:  Supporters say that it will unify Europe, break down internal barriers, and give the EU more strategic power in the world against American interests and other growing international alliances.
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Original:  Game synopsis Team123FinalDetroit1113Pittsburgh0112 Detroit's Brian Rafalski scored the only goal in the first period.
Revised: Pittsburgh last won the Stanley Cup in 1992 and was seeking its third Cup in these playoffs. Game synopsis Team123FinalDetroit1113Pittsburgh0112 Detroit's Brian Rafalski scored the only goal in the first period.
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Original:  In the final two minutes, Pittsburgh's Sergei Gonchar reduced Detroit's lead to 3-2, but  couldn't force a tie at the end.
Revised:  In the final two minutes, Pittsburgh's Sergei Gonchar reduced Detroit's lead to 3-2, but the Penguins couldn't force a tie at the end.
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Original: Mellon Arena in Pittsburgh The Detroit Red Wings won their 11th Stanley Cup in National Hockey League (NHL) history on Wednesday.
Revised: Mellon Arena in The Detroit Red Wings won their 11th Stanley Cup in National Hockey League (NHL) history on Wednesday.
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Original: Mellon Arena in Pittsburgh The Detroit Red Wings won their 11th Stanley Cup in National Hockey League (NHL) history on Wednesday.
Revised: Mellon Arena in Pittsburgh PittsburghThe Detroit Red Wings won their 11th Stanley Cup in National Hockey League (NHL) history on Wednesday.
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Original: The National Youth Risk Behavior Survey (YRBS) has been run every two years by the CDC  , and is an anonymous, self-administered survey of students in grades 9 to 12.
Revised: The National Youth Risk Behavior Survey (YRBS) is run by the CDC , and is an anonymous, self-administered survey of students in grades 9 to 12.
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Original:  In the 2007 YRBS, over 14,000 students  from across 44 U.S. states, 5 territories, and several individual districts .
Revised:  In the 2007 YRBS, over 14,000 students were surveyed from across 44 U.S. states, 5 territories, and several individual districts .
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Original:  However, Hispanic teens showed greater prevalence of many behaviors than their white and black counterparts, and had not made as much progress in several key areas  .
Revised:  However, the CDC found that Hispanic students had made less progress than black or white students in several key areas .
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Original:  However, Hispanic teens showed greater prevalence of many behaviors than their white and black counterparts, and had not made as much progress in several key areas  .
Revised:  However, Hispanic teens showed greater prevalence of many behaviors than their white and black counterparts, and had not made as much progress in several key areas of reducing risky behavior .
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Original: A report published by the United States Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) on Wednesday showed that in the past 16 years high school students have become less likely to engage in health risk-related behaviors such as having sex and taking drugs.
Revised: A report published by the United States Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) showed that in the past 16 years high school students have become less likely to engage in health risk-related behaviors such as having sex and taking drugs.
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