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Original:  After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterday's (1 July 2006) World Cup quarter-final, Beckham announced at a press conference at the team's training camp in Germany that he stands down from his position of captain immediately but would remain a part of the England team.
Revised:  After the teams loss to Portgual in yesterday's (1 July 2006) World Cup quarter-final, Beckham announced at a press conference at the team's training camp in Germany that he stands down from his position of captain immediately but would remain a part of the England team.
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Original:  He had served 58 games of the 92 he has played as the national captain . Bookies are now taking bets on who will succeed Beckham in the role, with Chelsea's John Terry odds on favourite
Revised:  He had served 58 games of the 92 he has played as the national captain Bookies are now taking bets on who will succeed Beckham in the role, with Chelsea's John Terry odds on favourite
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Original:  He had served 58 games of the 92 he has played as the national captain . Bookies are now taking bets on who will succeed Beckham in the role, with Chelsea's John Terry odds on favourite
Revised:  He had served 58 games of the 92 he has played as the national captain . 
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Original:  In addition, two US soldiers were charged last week with voluntary manslaughter for the killing of an unarmed Iraqi civilian outside his home and this month . A sailor and seven marines were charged with premeditated murder, kidnapping  and other offenses for the killing of a reportedly handicapped Iraqi in the town of Hamdania near Baghdad in April.
Revised:  In addition, two US soldiers were charged last week with voluntary manslaughter for the killing of an unarmed Iraqi civilian outside his home . And this month a sailor and seven marines were charged with premeditated murder, kidnapping and other offenses for the killing of a reportedly handicapped Iraqi in the town of Hamdania near Baghdad in April.
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Original:  In addition, two US soldiers were charged last week with voluntary manslaughter for the killing of an unarmed Iraqi civilian outside his home and this month . A sailor and seven marines were charged with premeditated murder, kidnapping  and other offenses for the killing of a reportedly handicapped Iraqi in the town of Hamdania near Baghdad in April.
Revised:  In addition, two US soldiers were charged last week with voluntary manslaughter for the killing of an unarmed Iraqi civilian outside his home and this month . A sailor and seven marines were charged with premeditated murder, kidnapping , and other offenses for the killing of a reportedly handicapped Iraqi in the town of Hamdania near Baghdad in April.
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Original:  Growth, however, picked up in 2004 and is expected to further improve in 2004.
Revised:  Growth, however, picked up in 2004 and is expected to further improve in 2005.
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Original: Presidential candidate Felipe Calderón won a narrow victory on Thursday in the Mexican general election.
Revised: Presidential candidate Felipe Calderón was declared the winner of a narrow victory on Thursday in the Mexican general election.
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Original: Both leading Mexican presidential candidates earlier proclaimed victory in the Mexican presidential race despite notice from Mexico's Federal Electoral Institute (IFE) that the numbers were currently too close to determine the winner.
Revised: Both leading Mexican presidential candidates earlier proclaimed victory in the Mexican presidential race despite notice from Mexico's Federal Electoral Institute (IFE) that the numbers were too close to determine the winner.
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Original:  However, reports from every voting booth filled by representatives of all parties have already been distributed to the contenders .
Revised:  However, reports from every voting booth filled by representatives of all parties have already been distributed to the contenders 
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Original:  In accordance with Mexican electoral law, workers counted the tallies attached to ballot boxes at polling stations, but were not opening properly sealed and tallied ballot boxes .
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Original: Felipe Calderón Presidential candidate Felipe Calderón was declared the winner of a narrow victory on Thursday in the Mexican general election.
Revised: Felipe Calderón Presidential candidate Felipe Calderón was declared the winner of a close election on Thursday in the Mexican general election.
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Original: Felipe Calderón Presidential candidate Felipe Calderón was declared the winner of a close election on Thursday in the Mexican general election.
Revised: Felipe Calderón Presidential candidate Felipe Calderón was declared the winner of a close race on Thursday in the Mexican general election.
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Original: A 15-year-old, who cannot be named, is in court charged with murder for dropping an eight kilogram concrete block from an overbridge onto a car driving along Auckland's southern motorway .
Revised: A 15-year-old, who cannot be named, is in court charged with murder after they dropped an eight kilogram concrete block from an overbridge onto a car driving along Auckland's southern motorway .
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Original: A 15-year-old, who cannot be named, is in court charged with murder after they dropped an eight kilogram concrete block on a car and killed the driver, Christopher Currie.
Revised: A 15-year-old, who cannot be named, is in court charged with murder after he dropped an eight kilogram concrete block on a car and killed the driver, Christopher Currie.
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Original: A 15-year-old, who cannot be named, is in court charged with murder after he dropped an eight kilogram concrete block on a car and killed the driver , Christopher Currie .
Revised: A 15-year-old, who cannot be named, is in court charged with murder after he dropped an eight kilogram concrete block on a car and killed the driver .
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Original:  Christopher Currie was driving in a Honda Civic car and was driving along Auckland's southern motorway  .
Revised:  Christopher Currie was driving along Auckland's southern motorway .
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Original:  it explores adult themes and contains graphic language and brief nudity . Category:Arts and Entertainment Category:Movies Category:Fi
Revised:  it explores adult themes and contains graphic language and brief nudity Category:Arts and Entertainment Category:Movies Category:Fi
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Original:  it explores adult themes and contains graphic language and brief nudity . Category:Arts and Entertainment Category:Movies Category:Fi
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Original:  A house in Eglinton, a village suburb of Bathurst in Central-Western New South Wales has been significantly damaged after being hit by a truck just before 3 p.m. today.
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Original:  It is unknown if anyone was inside the house at the time the accident occurred.
Revised:  It is not known if anyone was inside the house at the time the accident occurred.
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Original: It is believed that the truck was travelling along Eleven Mile Drive, Eglinton when a Subaru Forester pulled into its path from a side street.
Revised: It is believed that the truck was traveling along Eleven Mile Drive, Eglinton when a Subaru Forester pulled into its path from a side street.
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Original: 200px|right 200px|right  A house in Eglinton, a village suburb of Bathurst in Central-Western New South Wales has been significantly damaged after being hit by a truck just before 3 p.m. today.
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Original:    "Look at this.
Revised:  The school has installed RFID detectors at the doors of several classrooms as well as the bathrooms, though they claim that the bathroom units have not been turned on yet. "Look at this.
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Original: The San Francisco Chronicle quotes the 13-year-old daughter of Michelle and Jeff Tatro as saying:"Look at this.
Revised: On the other side, the San Francisco Chronicle quotes the 13-year-old daughter of Michelle and Jeff Tatro as saying:"Look at this.
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Original:  Pfizer has filed lawsuits against the two companies, and has taken actions against websites which use the word "Viagra" in their domain names , such as freegenericviagra.com . Sales of controlled drugs from Canadian pharmacies to the United States are illegal, but most drugs sold in Canada have nevertheless undergone testing by the U.S. Food and Drug Administration.
Revised:  Pfizer has filed lawsuits against the two companies, and has taken actions against websites which use the word "Viagra" in their domain names . Sales of controlled drugs from Canadian pharmacies to the United States are illegal, but most drugs sold in Canada have nevertheless undergone testing by the U.S. Food and Drug Administration.
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Original:  BACKGROUND%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Spamming remains one of the biggest problems facing email users today.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Example spam email advertising drugs against impotence For Microsoft's part, they allege that the joint effort with Pfizer is part of their "multi-pronged attack on the barrage of spam."
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% For Microsoft's part, they allege that the joint effort with Pfizer is part of their "multi-pronged attack on the barrage of spam."
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Original: Example spam email advertising drugs against impotence For Microsoft's part, they allege that the joint effort with Pfizer is part of their "multi-pronged attack on the barrage of spam."
Revised:  For Microsoft's part, they allege that the joint effort with Pfizer is part of their "multi-pronged attack on the barrage of spam."
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Original:  This year it has recorded the highest death tool in the worl 
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Original:  This year it has recorded the highest death tool in the world . Category: Oceania Category: Indonesia Category: Heal
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Original:  This year it has recorded the highest death tool in the world . Category: Oceania Category: Indonesia Category: Heal
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Original:  This year they have recorded the highest death tool in the world
Revised:  This year they have recorded the highest death toll in the world
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Original: East Java The World Health Organisation confirmed the death of a five-year-old boy on June 16 was due to bird flu.
Revised:  The World Health Organisation confirmed the death of a five-year-old boy on June 16 was due to bird flu.
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Original:   The boy died in Tulungagung, East Java province, after being admitted to hospital on June 8.
Revised:  East Java The boy died in Tulungagung, East Java province, after being admitted to hospital on June 8.
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Original:  The death was confirmed by a WHO laboratory in Hong Kong 
Revised:  The death was confirmed by a WHO laboratory in Hong Kong .
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Original: The World Health Organisation confirmed the death of a five-year-old boy on June 16 was due to bird flu.
Revised:  confirmed the death of a five-year-old boy on June 16 was due to bird flu.
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Original:  “I have asked that AMCA also assess this distribution of the material, and I have written to the media outlets in question this afternoon requesting that they immediately remove the material pending ACMA’s findings," she said     
Revised:  “I have asked that AMCA also assess this distribution of the material, and I have written to the media outlets in question this afternoon requesting that they immediately remove the material pending ACMA’s findings," she said . 
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Original: Forum users on the Big Brother fansite - Behind Big Brother seem to be split on the incident. forum user said they thought the media had hyped up the incident.
Revised: Forum users on the Big Brother fan site - Behind Big Brother seem to be split on the incident. forum user said they thought the media had hyped up the incident.
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Original:  In reality it was much more light hearted and foreshadowed before it occured .
Revised:  In reality it was much more light hearted and foreshadowed before it occurred .
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Original:  The show's website streams footage from the house over the internet 24 hours a day to subscribers aged 18 and over.
Revised:  The show's website streams footage from the house over the Internet 24 hours a day to subscribers aged 18 and over.
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Original:  Under the Australian Broadcasting Services Act, 1992, it is illegal for content which would be refused classification or given a rating of X18+ to be broadcast via the internet .
Revised:  Under the Australian Broadcasting Services Act, 1992, it is illegal for content which would be refused classification or given a rating of X18+ to be broadcast via the Internet .
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Original: Forum users on the Big Brother fan site - Behind Big Brother seem to be split on the incident. forum users said they thought the media had hyped the incident.
Revised: Forum users on the Big Brother fan site - Behind Big Brother seem to be split on the incident. Forum users said they thought the media had hyped the incident.
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Original: date|July 4, 2006 Heavy rainfall continued in Mumbai for the fourth consecutive day today, leading to water-logging in many areas of India's commercial capital and leading to the disruption of road and rail traffic.
Revised:  Heavy rainfall continued in Mumbai for the fourth consecutive day today, leading to water-logging in many areas of India's commercial capital and leading to the disruption of road and rail traffic.
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Original: Heavy rainfall continued in Mumbai for the fourth consecutive day today, leading to water-logging in many areas of India's commercial capital and leading to the disruption of road and rail traffic.
Revised: Heavy rainfall continued in the city of Mumbai in India for the fourth consecutive day today, leading to water-logging in many areas of India's commercial capital and leading to the disruption of road and rail traffic.
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Original:  The runways at the Chhatrapati Shivaji International Airport have also been flooded to some extent, leading to many incoming flights  being diverted to either Ahmedabad or Goa.
Revised:  Operations at the Chhatrapati Shivaji International Airport have also been flooded to some extent, leading to many incoming flights being diverted to either Ahmedabad or Goa.
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Original:  The runways at the Chhatrapati Shivaji International Airport have also been flooded to some extent, leading to many incoming flights  being diverted to either Ahmedabad or Goa.
Revised:  The runways at the Chhatrapati Shivaji International Airport have been affected and many incoming flights being diverted to either Ahmedabad or Goa.
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Original:  The runways at the Chhatrapati Shivaji International Airport have also been flooded to some extent, leading to many incoming flights  being diverted to either Ahmedabad or Goa.
Revised:  The runways at the Chhatrapati Shivaji International Airport have also been flooded to some extent, leading to many incoming flights are being diverted to either Ahmedabad or Goa.
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Original:  Local  trains on the Western Line are running upto half-an-hour late while the Central and Harbour Lines have been shut down due to water-logging.
Revised:  Local commuter trains on the Western Line are running upto half-an-hour late while the Central and Harbour Lines have been shut down due to water-logging.
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Original:  S.V road has been closed to commuters at this point, and cars are being diverted to Linking Road.
Revised:  S.V Road has been closed to commuters at this point, and cars are being diverted to Linking Road.
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Original:  There are huge traffic jams in several parts of the city and Mumbai Police Commissioner A.N.Roy has asked citizens to avoid going outdoors unless absolutely neseccary . Suburbs in the north of Mumbai, from Borivali to Virar, have been the worst hit.
Revised:  There are huge traffic jams in several parts of the city and Mumbai Police Commissioner A.N.Roy has asked citizens to avoid going outdoors unless absolutely necessary . Suburbs in the north of Mumbai, from Borivali to Virar, have been the worst hit.
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Original:  The Powai Lake has begun to overflow and the Mithi River is fast reaching it's danger-mark, which is a cause of great concern for the Municipal Corporation , which has rushed rescue teams to low-lying areas.
Revised:  The Powai Lake has begun to overflow and the Mithi River is fast reaching its danger-mark, which is a cause of great concern for the Municipal Corporation , which has rushed rescue teams to low-lying areas.
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Original:  The Powai Lake has begun to overflow and the Mithi River is fast reaching it's danger-mark, which is a cause of great concern for the Municipal Corporation , which has rushed rescue teams to low-lying areas.
Revised:  The Powai Lake has begun to overflow and the Mithi River is fast reaching it's danger-mark, which is a cause of great concern for the municipal corporation , which has rushed rescue teams to low-lying areas.
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Original:  The MET Department, which recorded 121 mm of rainfall at the Colaba Observatory and 152 mm of rain at the Santacruz Observatory, has predicted more heavy rainfall over the next 72 hours.
Revised:  The Metereological Department, which recorded 121 mm of rainfall at the Colaba Observatory and 152 mm of rain at the Santacruz Observatory, has predicted more heavy rainfall over the next 72 hours.
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Original: Noel Choong, of the International Maritime Bureau’s piracy centre in Malaysia, said the two ships were sailing from Sumatra to Aceh when the pirates struck , "The attacks took place not far apart from each other.
Revised: Noel Choong, of the International Maritime Bureau’s piracy centre in Malaysia, said the two ships were sailing from Sumatra to Aceh when the pirates struck . "The attacks took place not far apart from each other.
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Original:  The Malacca Strait is one of the busiest sea lanes in the world,  for centuries, piracy has been a notorious threat in the Strait.
Revised:  The Malacca Strait is one of the busiest sea lanes in the world, and for centuries, piracy has been a notorious threat in the Strait.
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Original:  Since the terrorist attacks in the U.S. on September 11, 2001, the threat of assaults has increased.
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Original: Noel Choong, of the International Maritime Bureau’s piracy centre in Malaysia, said the two ships were sailing from Sumatra to Aceh when the pirates struck.
Revised: Noel Choong, of the International Maritime Bureau’s piracy centre in Malaysia, said the two ships were sailing from Aceh,Sumatra when the pirates struck.
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Original: Noel Choong, of the International Maritime Bureau’s piracy centre in Malaysia, said the two ships were sailing from Aceh,Sumatra when the pirates struck.
Revised: Noel Choong, of the International Maritime Bureau’s piracy centre in Malaysia, said the two ships were sailing from Sumatra to Aceh when the pirates struck.
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Original: Nine days later, apparently by his own violition , Jen removed the comments from his blog.
Revised: Nine days later, apparently by his own volition , Jen removed the comments from his blog.
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Original:  Google, Inc. has sacked a new employee after he made a series of  comments about the company on a publically-viewable blog.
Revised:  Google, Inc. has said he was fired after he made a series of comments about the company on a publically-viewable blog.
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Original:  Google, Inc. has sacked a new employee after he made a series of  comments about the company on a publically-viewable blog.
Revised:  Google, Inc. has sacked a new employee after he made a series of unfavorable comments about the company on a publically-viewable blog.
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Original:  He then went on to make several observations about the company over the following week .
Revised:  Hethen went on to make several observations about the company over the following week .
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Original:  Nine days later, apparently by his own volition, Jen removed the comments from his blog.
Revised:  Nine days later, apparently of his own volition, Jen removed the comments from his blog.
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