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Original: Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni , Ethiopian Prime Minister Hailemariam Desalegn , Kenyan President Uhuru Kenyatta , and UN secretary-general Ban Ki-moon all expressed their approval of the deal's signing.
Revised: Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni , Ethiopian Prime Minister , Kenyan President Uhuru Kenyatta , and UN secretary-general Ban Ki-moon all expressed their approval of the deal's signing.
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Original: Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni , Ethiopian Prime Minister Hailemariam Desalegn , Kenyan President Uhuru Kenyatta , and UN secretary-general Ban Ki-moon all expressed their approval of the deal's signing.
Revised: Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni , Ethiopian Prime Minister Hailemariam Desalegn , Kenyan President , and UN secretary-general Ban Ki-moon all expressed their approval of the deal's signing.
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Original:  Kiir says international leaders were "careless" with negotiations and warned an imperfect deal could do more harm.
Revised:  Kiir says international leaders were "careless" with negotiations and warned a flawed deal could do more harm.
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Original: Under the deal  Kiir will share power with .
Revised: Under the deal , Kiir will share power with .
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Original: The Ubuntu Foundation released the third version of its popular Linux distribution yesterday.
Revised: The Ubuntu Foundation released it's third version of its popular Linux distribution yesterday.
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Original: The Ubuntu Foundation released the third version of its popular Linux distribution yesterday.
Revised: The Ubuntu Foundation released the third version of the popular GNU/Linux operating system distribution yesterday.
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Original:  The distribution is offered for free, and free CDs (including shipping) are available for order via the Internet 
Revised:  The distribution is offered for free, and CDs are available for order via the Internet 
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Original:  The distribution is offered for free, and free CDs (including shipping) are available for order via the Internet 
Revised:  The distribution is offered for free, and free CDs (including shipping) are available for order via the Internet without charge (including shipping)
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Original: The ruins  are of a central Qijia settlement, which has been the site of other significant discoveries, such as the largest stone chime ever found in China (2002) , and the largest and most intact prehistoric oven found in Northwestern China.
Revised: The ruins are of a central Qijia settlement, which has been the site of other significant discoveries, such as the largest stone chime ever found in China , and the largest and most intact prehistoric oven found in Northwestern China.
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Original: Chinese archaeologists at the Lajia Ruins in the Quinghai province of China have discovered well-preserved millet noodles dating back to the neolithic age.
Revised: Chinese archaeologists at the Lajia Ruins in the Qinghai province of China have discovered well-preserved millet noodles dating back to the neolithic age.
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Original:  "He needs to be talking to the boots on the ground and that's not a bunch of captains.    
Revised:  "He needs to be talking to the boots on the ground and that's not a bunch of captains. " 
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Original:  We were given an idea as to what topics he may discuss with us, but it's the President of the United States;
Revised: " We were given an idea as to what topics he may discuss with us, but it's the President of the United States;
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Original:   We practiced passing the microphone around to one another, so we wouldn't choke someone on live TV.
Revised:  " We practiced passing the microphone around to one another, so we wouldn't choke someone on live TV.
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Original:  Pentagon officials defended the teleconference, saying that the soldiers gave their own opinions.
Revised:  Pentagon officials defended the teleconference, saying that the soldiers stated their own opinions.
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Original:  Pentobarbital, an alternative which used at the Dignitas clinic in Switzerland, is used for lethal injections in Oregon, and has started to be used by Oklahoma  
Revised:  Pentobarbital, an alternative which used at the Dignitas clinic in Switzerland, is used for lethal injections in Oregon, and has started to be used by Oklahoma . 
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Original: The shortage means that executions in California and Olklahoma have been delayed, with Texas' last remaining stocks of the drug due to expire in March, weeks before two scheduled executions.
Revised: The shortage means that executions in California and Oklahoma have been delayed, with Texas' last remaining stocks of the drug due to expire in March, weeks before two scheduled executions.
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Original: Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail, is used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy, until Italian authorities stated that they would only licence the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes, and not, crucially, for executions.
Revised: Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail, used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy, until Italian authorities stated that they would only licence the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes, and not, crucially, for executions.
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Original:  Although many European countries manufacture the drug, which is primarily used in Europe as an anaesthetic , no manufacturer has been found that is willing to supply it for use in conjunction with the death penalty, the abolition of which has been lobbied by the EU since 2008.
Revised:  Although many European countries manufacture the drug, which is primarily used in Europe as an anæsthetic , no manufacturer has been found that is willing to supply it for use in conjunction with the death penalty, the abolition of which has been lobbied by the EU since 2008.
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Original: |left]] The sole United States manufacturer of a key component of lethal injections has announced Friday that it will cease production of the drug, contributing to shortages and delaying executions.
Revised: |left]] The sole United States manufacturer of a key component of lethal injections announced Friday that it will cease production of the drug, contributing to shortages and delaying executions.
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Original:  Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail , used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy , until Italian authorities stated that they would only licence the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes , and not, crucially, for executions.
Revised:  Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy , until Italian authorities stated that they would only licence the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes , and not, crucially, for executions.
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Original:  Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail , used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy , until Italian authorities stated that they would only licence the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes , and not, crucially, for executions.
Revised:  Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail , used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy until Italian authorities stated that they would only licence the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes , and not, crucially, for executions.
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Original:  Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail , used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy , until Italian authorities stated that they would only licence the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes , and not, crucially, for executions.
Revised:  Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail , used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy , until Italian authorities stated that they would only license the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes , and not, crucially, for executions.
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Original:  Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail , used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy , until Italian authorities stated that they would only licence the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes , and not, crucially, for executions.
Revised:  Sodium thiopental, the first of a three drug cocktail , used in 34 states to render the prisoner to be executed unconscious, was manufactured in Italy , until Italian authorities stated that they would only licence the manufacture if it was used for medical purposes and not, crucially, for executions.
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Original:  It said that, although they disagree with the death penalty, " The ASA certainly does not condone the use of sodium thiopental for capital punishment, but we also do not condone using the issue as the basis to place undue burdens on the distribution of this critical drug to the United States.
Revised:  It said that, although they disagree with the death penalty, " we also do not condone using the issue as the basis to place undue burdens on the distribution of this critical drug to the United States.
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Original: Close up of  Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the  Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in the river and lake regions around the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in a quantity numbering in the 80’s on a small creek feeding into the Potomac River near Washington D.C. earlier this week.
Revised: Close up of the Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in the river and lake regions around the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in a quantity numbering in the 80’s on a small creek feeding into the Potomac River near Washington D.C. earlier this week.
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Original: Close up of  Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the  Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in the river and lake regions around the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in a quantity numbering in the 80’s on a small creek feeding into the Potomac River near Washington D.C. earlier this week.
Revised: Close up of Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the Northern Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in the river and lake regions around the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in a quantity numbering in the 80’s on a small creek feeding into the Potomac River near Washington D.C. earlier this week.
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Original: Close up of  Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the  Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in the river and lake regions around the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in a quantity numbering in the 80’s on a small creek feeding into the Potomac River near Washington D.C. earlier this week.
Revised: Close up of Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in the river and lake regions around the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in quantities numbering into the 80’s on a small creek feeding into the Potomac River near Washington D.C. earlier this week.
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Original: Close up of  Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the  Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in the river and lake regions around the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in a quantity numbering in the 80’s on a small creek feeding into the Potomac River near Washington D.C. earlier this week.
Revised: Close up of Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in the river and lake regions around the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in a quantity numbering in the 80’s on a small feeder creek of the Potomac River near Washington D.C. earlier this week.
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Original:  The numbers entrapped were enough to convince some biologists that the species is here to stay, and echo concerns for what the voracious fish will do to the natural balance of the water’s ecosystem.
Revised:  The numbers were enough to convince some biologists that the species is here to stay, and echo concerns for what the voracious fish will do to the natural balance of the water’s ecosystem.
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Original:  The numbers entrapped were enough to convince some biologists that the species is here to stay, and echo concerns for what the voracious fish will do to the natural balance of the water’s ecosystem.
Revised:  The numbers entrapped were enough to convince some biologists that the species is here to stay, and to echo concerns over what the voracious fish will do to the natural balance of the water’s ecosystem.
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Original:   The Snakeheads caught previously in the region of the Potomac River are not genetically the exact same species of ones that caused a media stir in 2002, when the fish was first discovered in the region and led to the draining of an entire pond in an effort to eradicate its presence near Crofton, Maryland.
Revised:  Previous to this recent finding of the snakeheads, those caught along Potomac River were not genetically descendent from the species that caused a media stir in 2002, when the fish was first discovered in the region and led to the draining of an entire pond in an effort to eradicate its presence near Crofton, Maryland.
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Original:  The slight genetic differences between the fish of the Crofton area and the Potomac lent hope to its presence there being another indication that the fish was released into the wild, and not a suggestion of rapid spawning and population growth from a single source .
Revised:  The slight genetic differences between the Crofton fish and those of the Potomac lends hope to the belief that the fish was released into the wild, and not a suggestion of rapid spawning and population growth from a single source .
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Original:  The slight genetic differences between the fish of the Crofton area and the Potomac lent hope to its presence there being another indication that the fish was released into the wild, and not a suggestion of rapid spawning and population growth from a single source .
Revised:  The slight genetic differences between the fish of the Crofton area and the Potomac lent hope to its presence there being another indication that the fish was released into the wild, and not an indication of a rapid spawning and population growth from a single source .
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Original:  The slight genetic differences between the fish of the Crofton area and the Potomac lent hope to its presence there being another indication that the fish was released into the wild, and not a suggestion of rapid spawning and population growth from a single source .
Revised:  The slight genetic differences between the fish of the Crofton area and the Potomac lent hope to its presence there being another indication that the fish was released into the wild, and not a suggestion of rapid spawning and population growth of the species .
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Original: Close up of the Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the Northern Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in waters east of the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in quantities numbering into the 80’s on a small feeder creek of the Potomac River near Washington D.C. earlier this week.
Revised: Close up of the Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the Northern Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in waters east of the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in quantities numbering into the 80’s on a small feeder creek of the Potomac River near earlier this week.
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Original:  Previous to this recent finding of the snakeheads , those caught along Potomac River were not genetically descendent from the species that caused a media stir in 2002, when the fish was first discovered are received notoriety.
Revised:  Previous to this recent snakehead finding , those caught along Potomac River were not genetically descendent from the species that caused a media stir in 2002, when the fish was first discovered are received notoriety.
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Original:  Previous to this recent finding of the snakeheads , those caught along Potomac River were not genetically descendent from the species that caused a media stir in 2002, when the fish was first discovered are received notoriety.
Revised:  Previous to this recent finding of the snakeheads , those caught along Potomac River were not genetically descendent from the species that caused a media stir in 2002, when the fish was first discovered and gained notoriety.
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Original:  That discovery led to the draining of an entire pond in an effort to eradicate its presence near Crofton, Maryland.
Revised:  That discovery led to the draining of an entire pond in an effort to eradicate its habitat near Crofton, Maryland.
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Original:  The slight genetic differences between the Crofton fish and those of the Potomac lends hope to the belief that the fish were the another instance of their being released into the wild, and not an indication of a rapid spawning and population growth of the species.
Revised:  The slight genetic differences between the Crofton fish and those of the Potomac lends hope to the belief the Potomac fish were the another instance of their being released into the wild, and not an indication of a rapid spawning and population growth of the species.
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Original:  The slight genetic differences between the Crofton fish and those of the Potomac lends hope to the belief that the fish were the another instance of their being released into the wild, and not an indication of a rapid spawning and population growth of the species.
Revised:  The slight genetic differences between the Crofton fish and those of the Potomac lends hope to the belief that the fish were the another instance of their being released into the wild, and not an indication of a rapid spawning and population growth of their species.
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Original:  Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that it has been caught in an excess of 20 inches in length around the Potomac .
Revised:  Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that catches have been reported in lengths exceeding 20 inches in length around the Potomac .
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Original:  Sportsman are advised to kill the fish, and not simply “bank” it, because the species is capable of living out of water for several days and will crawl using its fins to propell it.
Revised:  Sportsman are advised to kill the fish, and not simply “bank” it, because the species is capable of living out of water for several days and can crawl using its fins to propell it.
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Original: Close up of the Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the Northern Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in waters east of the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in quantities numbering into the 80’s on a small feeder creek of the Potomac River near earlier this week.
Revised: Close up of the Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the Northern Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in waters east of the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in quantities numbering into the 80’s on a small feeder creek of the Potomac River earlier this week.
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Original:  From their televised appearance , they ranged  from 6 to 8 inches in length . Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that catches  have been reported in lengths exceeding 20 inches on the Potomac (.pdf map) below Washington D.C. . Whether the fish has any natural predators within its new environs is unknown.
Revised:  From their appearance in televised coverage , they ranged from 6 to 8 inches in length . Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that catches have been reported in lengths exceeding 20 inches on the Potomac (.pdf map) below Washington D.C. . Whether the fish has any natural predators within its new environs is unknown.
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Original:  From their televised appearance , they ranged  from 6 to 8 inches in length . Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that catches  have been reported in lengths exceeding 20 inches on the Potomac (.pdf map) below Washington D.C. . Whether the fish has any natural predators within its new environs is unknown.
Revised:  From their televised appearance , they ranged in length from 6 to 8 inches in length . Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that catches have been reported in lengths exceeding 20 inches on the Potomac (.pdf map) below Washington D.C. . Whether the fish has any natural predators within its new environs is unknown.
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Original:  From their televised appearance , they ranged  from 6 to 8 inches in length . Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that catches  have been reported in lengths exceeding 20 inches on the Potomac (.pdf map) below Washington D.C. . Whether the fish has any natural predators within its new environs is unknown.
Revised:  From their televised appearance , they ranged from 6 to 8 inches . Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that catches have been reported in lengths exceeding 20 inches on the Potomac (.pdf map) below Washington D.C. . Whether the fish has any natural predators within its new environs is unknown.
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Original:  From their televised appearance , they ranged  from 6 to 8 inches in length . Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that catches  have been reported in lengths exceeding 20 inches on the Potomac (.pdf map) below Washington D.C. . Whether the fish has any natural predators within its new environs is unknown.
Revised:  From their televised appearance , they ranged from 6 to 8 inches in length . Little is known about the toothy fish other than it is considered a top-level predator from its native region of China, and that catches of it have been reported in lengths exceeding 20 inches on the Potomac (.pdf map) below Washington D.C. . Whether the fish has any natural predators within its new environs is unknown.
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Original:  The slight genetic differences between the Crofton fish and those of the Potomac lends hope to the belief the Potomac fish were the another instance of their being released into the wild, and not an indication of a rapid spawning and population growth of their species.
Revised:  The slight genetic differences between the Crofton fish and those of the Potomac lends hope to the belief the Potomac fish were just another instance of their being released into the wild, and not an indication of a rapid spawning and population growth of their species.
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Original:  Dubbed the ‘Frankenfish’, after Frankenstein for this survival trait, notify the Department of Natural Resources of any encounter with it.
Revised:  Dubbed the ‘Frankenfish’, after Dr. Frankenstein's monster for this survival trait, notify the Department of Natural Resources of any encounter with it.
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