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Original:  A survey conducted by the Pentagon of around has concluded only 30\% believed that changing the law would have negative effect.
Revised:  A survey conducted by The Pentagon has concluded only 30\% believed that changing the law would have negative effect.
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Original:  The report following the survey was produced by Jeh C. Johnson, chief counsel at the Pentagon, and General Carter F. Ham, an U.S. Army commander in Europe.
Revised:  The report was produced by Jeh C. Johnson, chief counsel at the Pentagon, and General Carter F. Ham, an U.S. Army commander in Europe.
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Original:  The authors of the report believe otherwise  stating that they "do not underestimate the challenges in implementing a change in the law, but neither should we underestimate the ability of our extraordinarily dedicated service men and women to adapt to such change and continue to provide our nation with the military capability to accomplish any mission.
Revised:  The authors of the report believe otherwise , stating that they "do not underestimate the challenges in implementing a change in the law, but neither should we underestimate the ability of our extraordinarily dedicated service men and women to adapt to such change and continue to provide our nation with the military capability to accomplish any mission.
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Original:  Acacia argued that that the company was not making calls to mobile phones, but rather sending e-mails.
Revised:  Acacia argued that the company was not making calls to mobile phones, but rather sending e-mails.
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Original: Speaking about the release of the cables, he told ABC News: " U.S. officials have for 50 years trotted out this line when they are afraid the public is going to see how they really behave , " he wrote.
Revised: Speaking about the release of the cables, he told ABC News: " US officials have for 50 years trotted out this line when they are afraid the public is going to see how they really behave , " he wrote.
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Original: Speaking about the release of the cables, he told ABC News: " U.S. officials have for 50 years trotted out this line when they are afraid the public is going to see how they really behave , " he wrote.
Revised: Speaking about the release of the cables, he told ABC News: " U.S. officials have for 50 years trotted out this line when they are afraid the public is going to see how they really behave . " he wrote.
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Original: Speaking about the release of the cables, he told ABC News: " U.S. officials have for 50 years trotted out this line when they are afraid the public is going to see how they really behave , " he wrote.
Revised: Speaking about the release of the cables, he told ABC News: " U.S. officials have for 50 years trotted out this line when they are afraid the public is going to see how they really behave , " 
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Original:  The incidents are alleged to have occurred in August of this year  , several weeks after Assange released 75,000 documents  detailing US military actions in Afghanistan . "The background is that he has to be heard in this investigation and we haven't been able to get a hold of him to question him ," said Marianne Ny, director of prosecution in Sweden .
Revised:  The incidents are alleged to have occurred in August of this year , several weeks after Assange released 75,000 documents yo mama detailing US military actions in Afghanistan . "The background is that he has to be heard in this investigation and we haven't been able to get a hold of him to question him ," said Marianne Ny, director of prosecution in Sweden .
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Original:  Sanitation services in Delmas, only 70 kilometers from Johannesburg, are primitive.
Revised:  Sanitation services in Delmas, only 70 km from Johannesburg, are primitive.
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Original:  Commentators predicted  the nose gear would snap off on landing as designed to do under great stress .
Revised:  Commentators predicted that the nose gear would snap off on landing as designed to do under great stress .
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Original:  The aircraft successfully stopped . Officials were prepared with a fire engine in case the front wheel ignited.
Revised:  A cloud of white smoke and sparks burst out from behind the nose gear as the plane traveled down the runway. As the airplane finally stopped, the pilot had managed to keep the plane no more than 6 inches from the runway's centerline . Officials were prepared with a fire engine in case the front wheel ignited.
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Original:  There are 139 passengers and 6 crew  on board Flight 292
Revised:  JetBlue flight 292 was in a unique situation as each TV in the plane was equipped with live TV through DirecTV. Several of the stations carried on the LiveTV system had cameras trained on the plane and were monitoring the situation. It has been established that the televisions were operating as the plane circled the airfield, though there are conflicting reports on whether or not the televisions were in operation during the landing. For a time, passengers on board were able to watch their own airplane circle the airfield in a precarious situation. 139 passengers and 6 crew on board Flight 292
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Original: JetBlue flight 292 was in a unique situation as each TV in the plane was equipped with live TV through DirecTV.
Revised: JetBlue flight 292 was in a unique situation as each seat in the plane was equipped with live TV through DirecTV.
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Original: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely Jet Blue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from Burbank, California, encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
Revised: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from Burbank, California, encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
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Original: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from Burbank, w:California|California ]], encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
Revised: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from Burbank, CaliforniaCalifornia ]], encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
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Original: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from Burbank, CaliforniaCalifornia ]], encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
Revised: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from w:Burbank, California alifornia ]], encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
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Original: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from w:Burbank, California alifornia , encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
Revised: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from w:Burbank, California , encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
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Original: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from w: Burbank, California, encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
Revised: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from Burbank, California, encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
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Original: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from  Burbank, California, encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
Revised: 200px|jetBlue 292 touches down safely JetBlue Flight 292, en route to New York's JFK Airport from w: Burbank, California, encountered nose gear malfunctions shortly after takeoff.
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Original:  Considering as publishers are copyright holders to book contents, this could be the sole project of Google Print, assuming Google Print for Libraries is deemed "massive copyright infringement" by the District Court in Manhattan where the suit was filed
Revised:  Considering as publishers may be copyright holders to book contents, this could be the sole project of Google Print, assuming Google Print for Libraries is deemed "massive copyright infringement" by the District Court in Manhattan where the suit was filed
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Original:  Considering as publishers may be copyright holders to book contents, this could be the sole project of Google Print, assuming Google Print for Libraries is deemed "massive copyright infringement" by the District Court in Manhattan where the suit was filed
Revised:  Considering as publishers may be holders of the copyright in book contents, this could be the sole project of Google Print, assuming Google Print for Libraries is deemed "massive copyright infringement" by the District Court in Manhattan where the suit was filed
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Original: However, the ATSB said the new revelations about the safety of the aircraft reveal that the manufacturing fault with the Trent 900 engines "could lead to an elevated risk of fatigue crack initiation and growth, oil leakage and potential catastrophic engine failure from a resulting oil fire."
Revised: The ATSB said the manufacturing fault with the Trent 900 engines "could lead to an elevated risk of fatigue crack initiation and growth, oil leakage and potential catastrophic engine failure from a resulting oil fire."
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Original:  Late last month, Qantas announced the aircraft were to resume normal service.
Revised:  Late last month, Qantas announced the aircraft were safe and began returning them to service.
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Original:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", are fitted with a misaligned component which thins the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to a leakage and a fire.
Revised:  One Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", are fitted with a misaligned component which thins the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to a leakage and a fire.
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Original:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", are fitted with a misaligned component which thins the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to a leakage and a fire.
Revised:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engine , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", are fitted with a misaligned component which thins the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to a leakage and a fire.
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Original:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", are fitted with a misaligned component which thins the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to a leakage and a fire.
Revised:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", was found to be fitted with a misaligned component which thins the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to a leakage and a fire.
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Original:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", are fitted with a misaligned component which thins the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to a leakage and a fire.
Revised:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", are fitted with a misaligned component which thinned the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to a leakage and a fire.
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Original:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", are fitted with a misaligned component which thins the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to a leakage and a fire.
Revised:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", are fitted with a misaligned component which thins the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which lead to a leakage and a fire.
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Original:  One Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engine , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", was found to be fitted with a misaligned component which thinned the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which lead to a leakage and a fire.
Revised:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engine , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", was found to be fitted with a misaligned component which thinned the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which lead to a leakage and a fire.
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Original:  One Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engine , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", was found to be fitted with a misaligned component which thinned the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which lead to a leakage and a fire.
Revised:  One Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", was found to be fitted with a misaligned component which thinned the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which lead to a leakage and a fire.
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Original:  One Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engine , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", was found to be fitted with a misaligned component which thinned the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which lead to a leakage and a fire.
Revised:  One Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engine , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", may be prone to "fatigue cracking", which lead to a leakage and a fire.
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Original:  One Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engine , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", was found to be fitted with a misaligned component which thinned the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which lead to a leakage and a fire.
Revised:  One Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engine , which power Airbus A380 "superjumbos", was found to be fitted with a misaligned component which thinned the wall of an oil pipe, resulting in "fatigue cracking", which could lead to oil leakage and a fire.
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Original:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines, which power  Airbus A380 "superjumbos", may be prone to "fatigue cracking", which could lead to oil leakage and a fire.
Revised:  Some Rolls-Royce Trent 900 engines, which power some Airbus A380 "superjumbos", may be prone to "fatigue cracking", which could lead to oil leakage and a fire.
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Original:  Qantas insisted on Thursday that there was "no immediate risk to flight safety," but said they would conduct further investigations.
Revised:  Qantas emphasised on Thursday that there was "no immediate risk to flight safety," but said they would conduct further investigations.
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Original:  They added : "The new checks advised by the ATSB will be carried out as quickly as possible."
Revised:  They said : "The new checks advised by the ATSB will be carried out as quickly as possible."
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Original:  Two other airlines that use A380 aircraft with Trent engines, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines , did not ground their aircraft after the Singapore incident.
Revised:  Two other airlines use A380 aircraft with Trent engines, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines , did not ground their aircraft after the Singapore incident.
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Original:  Two other airlines that use A380 aircraft with Trent engines, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines , did not ground their aircraft after the Singapore incident.
Revised:  Two other airlines that use A380 aircraft with Trent engines, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines ;
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Original:  Meteorologists fear that Rita could cause similar, if not worse damage    
Revised:  Meteorologists fear that Rita could cause similar, if not worse damage . 
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Original:  It's already a Category 4, a huge storm, it's in warm waters and there's a potential for it to increase more," at a briefing in Washington DC. Since then the storm has been upgraded to a category 5 hurricane, the strongest category of  storm.
Revised:  It's already a Category 4, a huge storm, it's in warm waters and there's a potential for it to increase more," at a briefing in Washington DC. Since then the storm had been upgraded to a category 5 hurricane, the strongest category of storm.
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Original: Image:Tropical Storm Allison.jpg|200px|Houston after Tropical Storm Allison, June 2001.
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Original:  'We gave it our best shot' [[File:Sepp Blatter (2009).jpg|Sepp Blatter, President of FIFA, announced Russia and Qatar would host the tournament.
Revised: Qatar will build Sports City Stadium, designed by Dan Meis from Populous and inspired from traditional Arab tents, for the 2022 FIFA World Cup.The proposed Sports City Stadium in Doha will feature 47,560 seats. The vision is to create a retractable roof, partly retractable pitch and retractable stands that will make the stadium a premiere multi-use facility in the decades following the 2022 FIFA World Cup. The stadium's innovative features will make it an ideal venue for football matches, as well as concerts, theatre performances and non-football related athletic events. 'We gave it our best shot' [[File:Sepp Blatter (2009).jpg|Sepp Blatter, President of FIFA, announced Russia and Qatar would host the tournament.
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Original: Qatar will build Sports City Stadium, designed by Dan Meis from Populous and inspired from traditional Arab tents, for the 2022 FIFA World Cup.
Revised: Qatar will build Sports City Stadium, designed by Dan Meis from Populous and inspired from traditional Arab tents, for the FIFA World Cup.
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Original:  At the same time we gave it our best shot," said England ambassador Gary Lineker  "It was very well presented by our bid team.
Revised:  At the same time we gave it our best shot," said England ambassador Gary Lineker . "It was very well presented by our bid team.
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Original:  The Australian Sports Minister Mark Arbib told local media that “We’re all pretty shattered over here.
Revised:  The Australian Sports Minister Mark Arbib told local media : “We’re all pretty shattered over here.
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Original: The oil price has jumped as hurricane Rita heads towards refineries Crude oil prices are expected to jump back to US $68 a barrel after reaching the all-time high US$ 70.85 on Aug 30, in fear of the landing of Hurricane Rita along the US Gulf Coast in Texas, whose the key US oil production facilities were largely untouched by the catastrophic hurricane Katrina's onslaught three weeks ago.
Revised:  Crude oil prices are expected to jump back to US $68 a barrel after reaching the all-time high US$ 70.85 on Aug 30, in fear of the landing of Hurricane Rita along the US Gulf Coast in Texas, whose the key US oil production facilities were largely untouched by the catastrophic hurricane Katrina's onslaught three weeks ago.
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Original: The oil price has jumped as hurricane Rita heads towards refineries Crude oil prices are expected to jump back to US $68 a barrel after reaching the all-time high US$ 70.85 on Aug 30, in fear of the landing of Hurricane Rita along the US Gulf Coast in Texas, whose the key US oil production facilities were largely untouched by the catastrophic hurricane Katrina's onslaught three weeks ago.
Revised: The oil price has jumped as hurricane Rita heads towards refineries Crude oil prices are expected to reach US $68 a barrel after reaching the all-time high US $ 70.85 on Aug 30, in fear of the landing of Hurricane Rita along the US Gulf Coast in Texas, whose the key US oil production facilities were largely untouched by the catastrophic hurricane Katrina's onslaught three weeks ago.
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Original:  The National Weather Service has issued a flood watch for the Texas coastline, including Galveston, where the nation's largest oil refinery belonging to Exxon Mobil Corp  is located.
Revised:  The National Weather Service has issued a flood watch for the Texas coastline, including Galveston, where the nation's largest oil refinery belonging to Exxon Mobil Corp . is located.
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Original:  Shell Oil yesterday began shutting down its seventh-largest refinery in Deer Park, Texas, yesterday, which will be complete by late Thursday morning and there is no date set for resuming production.
Revised:  Shell Oil yesterday began shutting down its seventh-largest refinery in Deer Park, Texas, yesterday, which will be completed by late Thursday morning and there is no date set for resuming production.
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Original:  Shell Oil yesterday began shutting down its seventh-largest refinery in Deer Park, Texas, yesterday, which will be complete by late Thursday morning and there is no date set for resuming production.
Revised:  Shell Oil yesterday began shutting down its seventh-largest refinery in Deer Park, Texas, yesterday, which will be complete by late Thursday morning . There is no date set for resuming production.
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Original:  BP is pulling some workets from its Texas refinery and shutting parts of the fourth largest plants in US.
Revised:  BP is pulling some workers from its Texas refinery and shutting parts of the fourth largest plants in US.
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Original:  The Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries  agreed at its meeting in Vienna two days ago to effectively suspend its quota system for the first time since 1990 Gulf war to relieve the rising oil price by pumping an estimated addional 2 million barrels of oil a day which will begin at Oct 1 and last for 3 months.
Revised:  The Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries (OPEC) agreed at its meeting in Vienna two days ago to effectively suspend its quota system for the first time since 1990 Gulf war to relieve the rising oil price by pumping an estimated addional 2 million barrels of oil a day which will begin at Oct 1 and last for 3 months.
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Original:  Consuming countries have a responsibility to  lower taxes if they want lower fuel price, OPEC president Sheikh Ahmad Fahd al-Sabah, also the Oil minister of Kuwait, said
Revised:  Consuming nations have a responsibility to lower taxes if they want lower fuel price, OPEC president Sheikh Ahmad Fahd al-Sabah, also the Oil minister of Kuwait, said
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Original:  Consuming countries have a responsibility to  lower taxes if they want lower fuel price, OPEC president Sheikh Ahmad Fahd al-Sabah, also the Oil minister of Kuwait, said
Revised:  Consuming countries have a responsibility to lower taxes if they want lower fuel prices, OPEC President Sheikh Ahmad Fahd al-Sabah, also the Oil minister of Kuwait, said
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Original:  Consuming countries have a responsibility to  lower taxes if they want lower fuel price, OPEC president Sheikh Ahmad Fahd al-Sabah, also the Oil minister of Kuwait, said
Revised:  Consuming countries have a responsibility to lower taxes if they want lower fuel price, OPEC president Sheikh Ahmad Fahd al-Sabah, who is also Kuwait's oil minister, sai
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Original: Oil, natural gas, and gasoline futures  are all rising in anticipation of Rita's landfall on Friday.
Revised: Oil, natural gas, and gasoline futures prices are all rising in anticipation of Rita's landfall on Friday.
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Original:  Oil is rising about 1\% a day  while gasoline futures rose 5\% both Wednesday and Thursday.
Revised:  Oil is rising about 1\% a day , while gasoline futures rose 5\% both Wednesday and Thursday.
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Original:  Natural gas is also risingwith Nymex Henry Hub showing an increase  over 3.5\% on Thursday.
Revised:  Natural gas is also risingwith Nymex Henry Hub showing an increase of over 3.5\% on Thursday.
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Original:  Oil refineries in the path of the storm, rather than oil prices, are expected to increase prices at the pump.
Revised:  Oil refineries in the path of the storm, despite the pressure exerted by rising oil prices, are expected to increase prices at the pump.
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