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Original:  The mother, father and 5 year old sister of the girl, were also allegedly killed in the attack at their home in the town of Mahmoudiya, south of Baghdad.
Revised:  The mother, father and 5 year old sister of the girl, were also killed in the attack at their home in the town of Mahmoudiya, south of Baghdad.
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Original: Coca-Cola said that it would review it's security measurements .
Revised: Coca-Cola said that it would review it's security measures .
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Original: Three people have been charged in the United States for trying to sell Coca-Cola trade secrets to PepsiCo  .
Revised: Three people have been charged in the United States for an apparent attempt to sell Coca-Cola trade secrets to PepsiCo .
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Original:  The main suspect, administration worker Joya Williams, tried according to the prosecutors to sell documents and a liquid sample of a new Coca-Cola product to the archrival . During the meeting  the undercover agent gave Dimson $30,000 for the trade secrets and promised to pay an additional $45,000 later.
Revised:  The main suspect, administration worker Joya Williams, tried to sell documents and a liquid sample of a new Coca-Cola product to the archrival . During the meeting the undercover agent gave Dimson $30,000 for the trade secrets and promised to pay an additional $45,000 later.
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Original:  The main suspect, administration worker Joya Williams, tried according to the prosecutors to sell documents and a liquid sample of a new Coca-Cola product to the archrival . During the meeting  the undercover agent gave Dimson $30,000 for the trade secrets and promised to pay an additional $45,000 later.
Revised:  The main suspect, administration worker Joya Williams, tried according to the prosecutors to sell documents and a liquid sample of a new Coca-Cola product to the rival, prosecutors said . During the meeting the undercover agent gave Dimson $30,000 for the trade secrets and promised to pay an additional $45,000 later.
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Original:  The main suspect, administration worker Joya Williams, tried according to the prosecutors to sell documents and a liquid sample of a new Coca-Cola product to the archrival . During the meeting  the undercover agent gave Dimson $30,000 for the trade secrets and promised to pay an additional $45,000 later.
Revised:  The main suspect, administration worker Joya Williams, tried according to the prosecutors to sell documents and a liquid sample of a new Coca-Cola product to the archrival . During the meeting it is said the undercover agent gave Dimson $30,000 for the trade secrets and promised to pay an additional $45,000 later.
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Original: Three people have been charged in the United States for an apparent attempt to sell Coca-Cola trade secrets to PepsiCo , prosecutors alleged .
Revised: Three people have been charged in the United States for trying to sell Coca-Cola trade secrets to PepsiCo , prosecutors alleged .
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Original: Three people have been charged in the United States for an apparent attempt to sell Coca-Cola trade secrets to PepsiCo , prosecutors alleged .
Revised: Three people have been charged in the United States for an apparent attempt to sell Coca-Cola trade secrets to PepsiCo .
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Original:  As a candidate, Dean mobilized supports from across the country in his Dean for America campaign, using the Internet as a medium for organizing fundraising.
Revised:  As a candidate, Dean mobilized support from across the country in his Dean for America campaign, using the Internet as a medium for organizing fundraising.
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Original:  His knees were visibly shaking as he said this "
Revised:  His knees were visibly shaking as he said this .
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Original: United Nations  troops based in the Democratic Republic of  Congo face 150 allegations of rape including gang rapes committed against children as young as twelve.
Revised: United Nations (UN) troops based in the Democratic Republic of Congo face 150 allegations of rape including gang rapes committed against children as young as twelve.
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Original: United Nations  troops based in the Democratic Republic of  Congo face 150 allegations of rape including gang rapes committed against children as young as twelve.
Revised: United Nations troops based in the Democratic Republic of the Congo face 150 allegations of rape including gang rapes committed against children as young as twelve.
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Original:  The Secretary-General of the UN, Kofi Annan has condemned the soldiers and has banned the peacekeeping troops (those deployed in Congo) from having sex with locals .
Revised:  The Secretary-General of the UN, Kofi Annan has condemned the soldiers and has banned the peacekeeping troops (those deployed in Congo) from having sex with local residents .
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Original:  The United Nations has 65000 troops in 16 different locations, with 16,700 UN soldiers and other staff in Congo alone.
Revised:  The United Nations has 65,000 troops in 16 different locations, with 16,700 UN soldiers and other staff in Congo alone.
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Original:  The UN's own internal inquiry headed by former US Federal Reserve Board chair Paul Volcker confirmed misconduct allegations leading to the termination of several senior UN officials.
Revised:  The UN's own internal inquiry headed by former United States Federal Reserve Board chair Paul Volcker confirmed misconduct allegations leading to the termination of several senior UN officials.
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Original: India and China reopen the Nathula Pass in Sikkim for trade, closed for the past 44 years due to Sino-Indian War.
Revised: India and China reopened the Nathula Pass in Sikkim for trade, closed for the past 44 years due to Sino-Indian War.
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Original: India and China reopen the Nathula Pass in Sikkim for trade, closed for the past 44 years due to Sino-Indian War.
Revised: India and China reopen the Nathula Pass in the Himalayan state of Sikkim, on Thursday. The pass had been closed for the past 44 years due to Sino-Indian War.
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Original: India and China reopen the Nathula Pass in Sikkim for trade, closed for the past 44 years due to Sino-Indian War.
Revised: India and China reopen the Nathula Pass in Sikkim for trade, closed for the last 44 years due to Sino-Indian War.
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Original: India and China reopen the Nathula Pass in Sikkim for trade, closed for the past 44 years due to Sino-Indian War.
Revised: India and China reopen the Nathula Pass in Sikkim for trade, closed for the past 44 years , following the Sino-Indian War.
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Original:  The opening of  the pass was marked by a ceremony on the Indian side attended by officials from both sides, including Sikkim Chief Minister Pawan Kumar Chamling – the chief guest, the Chinese ambassador to India, and the Tibetan Autonomous RegionChairman , C Phuntsok.
Revised:  The opening of The opening of the pass was marked by a ceremony on the Indian side attended by officials from both sides, including Sikkim Chief Minister Pawan Kumar Chamling – the chief guest, the Chinese ambassador to India, and the Tibetan Autonomous RegionChairman , C Phuntsok.
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Original:  The opening of  the pass was marked by a ceremony on the Indian side attended by officials from both sides, including Sikkim Chief Minister Pawan Kumar Chamling – the chief guest, the Chinese ambassador to India, and the Tibetan Autonomous RegionChairman , C Phuntsok.
Revised:  The opening of the pass was marked by a ceremony on the Indian side attended by officials from both sides, including Sikkim Chief Minister Pawan Kumar Chamling – the chief guest, the Chinese ambassador to India, and the Chairman of the Tibet Autonomous Region , C Phuntsok.
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Original:  For now only few items are allowed to trade , but the opening is expected to stimulate the economy of the region, and also bolster Indo-Chinese trade, which amounted to $7 billion in 2004.
Revised:  At present, trade will be restricted to a small number of permitted goods, such as rice, tea and spices from India and goat and sheep skins, yak tails and silk from China. but the opening is expected to stimulate the economy of the region, and also bolster Indo-Chinese trade, which amounted to $7 billion in 2004.
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Original:  A Canadian reporter blew the secret.  
Revised:  A Canadian reporter blew the secret. . 
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Original:  A Canadian reporter  blew the secret. .
Revised:  A Canadian reporter had allegedly blew the secret. .
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Original:  The opening of the tomb would allow investigators to reconstruct an biological profile of the first King of Portugal, deceased 821 years ago.
Revised:  The opening of the tomb would allow investigators to reconstruct a biological profile of the first King of Portugal, deceased 821 years ago.
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Original:  The opening of the tomb would allow investigators to reconstruct an biological profile of the first King of Portugal, deceased 821 years ago.
Revised:  The opening of the tomb would allow investigators to reconstruct an biological profile of the first King of Portugal, who died 821 years ago.
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Original:  By analysing the bones and other mortal remains, like hair and nails, of Portugal's founder, the investigators would be able to determinate his stature, genetic profile, diet and any diseases that he might  had
Revised:  By analysing the bones and other remains, like hair and nails, of Portugal's founder, the investigators would be able to determinate his stature, genetic profile, diet and any diseases that he might had
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Original:  By analysing the bones and other mortal remains, like hair and nails, of Portugal's founder, the investigators would be able to determinate his stature, genetic profile, diet and any diseases that he might  had
Revised:  By analysing the bones and other mortal remains, like hair and nails, of Portugal's founder, the investigators would be able to determinate his stature, genetic profile, diet and any diseases that he might have had
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Original:  The attack and shooting were captured on the Herald building surveillance camera, which police have requested.
Revised:  The shooting was captured on the Herald building surveillance camera, which police have requested.
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Original:  The video then shows a police cruiser pulling up, with the officer getting out  and apparently commanding the man to stop attacking.
Revised:  The video then shows the officer getting out and apparently commanding the man to stop attacking.
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Original:  The video then shows a police cruiser pulling up, with the officer getting out  and apparently commanding the man to stop attacking.
Revised:  The video then shows a police cruiser pulling up, with the officer getting out of the cruiser and apparently commanding the man to stop attacking.
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Original:  According to the Herald, police are theorizing that the attacker was suffering from either or
Revised:  According to the Herald, police are theorizing that the attacker was suffering from either 
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Original:  According to the Herald, police are theorizing that the attacker was suffering from either
Revised:  According to the Herald, police believe the attacker may have been experiencing
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Original:  The police then fired what was described by various witnesses and sources as "a half dozen shots".
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Original:  According to the Herald, police believe the attacker may have been experiencing  
Revised:  According to the Herald, police believe the attacker may have been experiencing . 
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Original: A 36-year-old man, who is yet to be named, is undergoing surgery after an attacked lodged a knife through one cheek and out the other.
Revised: A 36-year-old man, who is yet to be named, is undergoing surgery after an attacker lodged a knife through one cheek and out the other.
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Original:  The handle broke off just leaving the 15 cm blade.
Revised:  The handle broke off just leaving the 15-cm blade.
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Original:  New Zealand Police report that the knife just missed his optic nerve and his condition is stable and not life-threatening .
Revised:  New Zealand Police report that the knife just missed his optic nerve and his condition is stable and not life threatening .
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Original:  The handle broke off just leaving the 15-cm (about 6 inches) blade  .
Revised:  The handle broke off , leaving the 15-cm (about 6 inches) blade .
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Original:  The handle broke off just leaving the 15-cm (about 6 inches) blade  .
Revised:  The handle broke off just leaving the 15-cm (about 6 inches) blade inside him .
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Original: A two minutes silence was held across the UK at noon BST (1100 ) UTC).
Revised: A two minutes silence was held across the UK at noon BST (1100 UTC).
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Original:  In many schools, offices, shops and town centres across the country the two minutes was observed . . Other events are planned around London for later in the day.
Revised:  In many schools, offices, shops and town centres across the country the two minutes was observed . Other events are planned around London for later in the day.
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Original:  Flowers were laid by mayor Ken Livingstone and Tessa Jowell, Secretary of State for Culture, near Kings Cross station at 8:50 a.m. BST (0750 UTC), marking the time and place of the first attack on a Piccadily Line train beneath the station.
Revised: On this day last year, a series of coordinated suicide bombings struck London's public transport system during the morning rush hour, with three bombs exploded within 50 seconds of each other on three London Underground trains. A fourth bomb exploded on a bus nearly an hour later in Tavistock Square. Fifty-two people were killed in the attacks, as were the four bombers, and about 700 injured in the deadliest single act of terrorism in the United Kingdom since the Lockerbie bombing in 1988 and the deadliest bombing in London since the Second World War. The four suicide bombers were all UK residents, and while Al Qaeda has claimed responsibility for the attacks, police are unsure its exact role in the attack. Flowers were laid by mayor Ken Livingstone and Tessa Jowell, Secretary of State for Culture, near Kings Cross station at 8:50 a.m. BST (0750 UTC), marking the time and place of the first attack on a Piccadily Line train beneath the station.
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Original:  Yesterday, a video of one of the bombers, Shehzad Tanweer, was broadcast on the Al-Jazeera network , claiming to link the attacks with Al-Qaeda  
Revised:  Yesterday, a video of one of the bombers, Shehzad Tanweer, was broadcast on the Al-Jazeera network , claiming to link the attacks with Al-Qaeda . 
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Original:  The four suicide bombers were all UK residents, and while Al Qaeda has claimed responsibility for the attacks, police are unsure  its exact role in the attack.
Revised:  The four suicide bombers were all UK residents, and while Al Qaeda has claimed responsibility for the attacks, police are unsure of its exact role in the attack.
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Original:  This left many seats  , particularly in the country's troubled Muslim south , where Thai Rak Thai stood unopposed in Democrat territory.
Revised:  This left many seats unopposed , particularly in the country's troubled Muslim south , where Thai Rak Thai stood unopposed in Democrat territory.
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Original:  This left many seats  , particularly in the country's troubled Muslim south , where Thai Rak Thai stood unopposed in Democrat territory.
Revised:  This left many seats , particularly in the country's troubled Muslim south . With Thai Rak Thai stood unopposed in Democrat territory.
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Original:  A grassroots abstention campaign left many seats empty when TRT failed to garner 20\% of eligble votes.
Revised:  A grassroots abstention campaign left many seats empty when they failed to garner 20\% of eligble votes.
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Original:  According to Sondhi Limthongkul's ThaiDay, the action seeking the disolution of five parties was delivered by truck and consisted of over 120,000 pages of legal citations.
Revised:  According to Sondhi Limthongkul's ThaiDay, the action seeking the dissolution of five parties was delivered by truck and consisted of over 120,000 pages of legal citations.
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Original:  With Thai Rak Thai standing alone in strong Democrat territory, a grassroots abstention campaign left many seats empty when they failed to garner 20\% of eligble votes.
Revised:  With Thai Rak Thai standing alone in strong Democrat territory, a grassroots abstention campaign left many seats empty when they failed to garner 20\% of eligible votes.
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Original:  The commission's sub-committee that prepared the report had recommended the disollution of Thai Rak Thai.
Revised:  The commission's sub-committee that prepared the report had recommended the dissolution of Thai Rak Thai.
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Original: Yesterday saw Thailand's Attorney General, filed charges of election fraud with the country's Constitutional court.
Revised: Yesterday saw Thailand's Attorney General, file charges of election fraud with the country's Constitutional court.
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Original:  The commission's sub-committee that prepared the report had recommended the dissolution of Thai Rak Thai   .
Revised:  The commission's sub-committee that prepared the report had recommended the dissolution of Thai Rak Thai . .
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Original: The European Space Agency's new Ariane-5 ECA rocket placed two satellites in orbit Saturday Feb. 12, successfully completing its initial qualifying flight.
Revised: The European Space Agency's new Ariane-5 ECA rocket placed two satellites in orbit Saturday February 12, successfully completing its initial qualifying flight.
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Original:  Launched from  Guiana Space Centre at Kourou, French Guiana, the new rocket design carried three payloads: the X-TAR-EUR communications satellite, the Sloshsat FLEVO experimental satellite, and the Maqsat B2 which remained attached to the Ariane upper stage.
Revised:  Launched from the Guiana Space Centre at Kourou, French Guiana, the new rocket design carried three payloads: the X-TAR-EUR communications satellite, the Sloshsat FLEVO experimental satellite, and the Maqsat B2 which remained attached to the Ariane upper stage.
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Original:  The Ariane ECA can carry up to ten tons of payload improving on the launch capacity of the Ariane 5 Generic by 4 tons .
Revised:  The Ariane ECA can carry up to ten tons of payload improving on the launch capacity of the Ariane 5 Generic by 4 tonnes .
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Original:  The European Space Agency's new Ariane 5 ECA rocket placed two satellites in orbit Saturday February 12, successfully completing its initial qualifying flight.
Revised: URL The European Space Agency's new Ariane 5 ECA rocket placed two satellites in orbit Saturday February 12, successfully completing its initial qualifying flight.
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Original: An Irish hearse driver was apparently in a rush to a County Donegal, Ireland funeral.
Revised: An hearse driver in County Donegal, Ireland funeral.
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Original:  John Carr was pulled over while leading a funeral procession  in a police crackdown of speeders.
Revised:  John Carr was pulled over while leading a funeral procession , in a police crackdown of speeders.
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Original:  John Carr was pulled over while leading a funeral procession  in a police crackdown of speeders.
Revised:  John Carr was pulled over while leading a funeral procession in a police crackdown on speeding. John
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Original:  Carr was clocked  at 69 km/h in a 50km/h zone and was citied a fine of 80 euros and 2 penalty points  to his driving record.
Revised:  Carr was clocked driving at 69 km/h in a 50km/h zone and was citied a fine of 80 euros and 2 penalty points to his driving record.
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Original:  Carr was clocked  at 69 km/h in a 50km/h zone and was citied a fine of 80 euros and 2 penalty points  to his driving record.
Revised:  Carr was clocked at 69 km/h in a 50km/h zone and fined of 80 euros and 2 penalty points to his driving record.
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Original:  Carr was clocked  at 69 km/h in a 50km/h zone and was citied a fine of 80 euros and 2 penalty points  to his driving record.
Revised:  Carr was clocked at 69 km/h in a 50km/h zone and was citied a fine of 80 euros and 2 penalty points were added to his driving record.
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Original:  Carr intends to pay the fine dispite being suprised at the unusual situation for the citation , "I've never heard of a hearse being done for speeding before.
Revised:  Carr intends to pay the fine . He said , "I've never heard of a hearse being done for speeding before.
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Original: Carr, as well as other drivers , were caught speeding in an areawhere hundreds were ticketed near a school zone .
Revised: Carr, as well as other drivers in the cortege, were among hundreds of drivers caught speeding in an areawhere hundreds were ticketed near a school zone .
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Original: Carr, as well as other drivers , were caught speeding in an areawhere hundreds were ticketed near a school zone .
Revised: Carr, as well as other drivers , were caught speeding in the area .
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Original: An hearse driver in County Donegal, Ireland was pulled over while leading a funeral procession, in a police crackdown on speeding.
Revised: A hearse driver in County Donegal, Ireland was pulled over while leading a funeral procession, in a police crackdown on speeding.
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Original:  John Carr was clocked driving at 69 km/h (43 miles/hour) in a 50km/h zone and fined of 80 euros and 2 penalty points were added to his driving record.
Revised:  John Carr was clocked driving at 69 km/h (43 miles/hour) in a 50km/h zone and fined 80 euros and 2 penalty points were added to his driving record.
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Original: The  opening match of the  2006 Tri Nations Series between the All Blacks and Australia at Jade Stadium in Christchurch, New Zealand is currently being contested.
Revised: The opening match of the 2006 Tri Nations at Jade Stadium in Christchurch, New Zealand is currently being contested.
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Original:  The Tri Nations has adopted an expanded  format this year , though it will revert back to the old format for next year's 2007 Rugby World Cup in France .
Revised:  The Tri Nations has adopted an expanded format this year .
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Original:  The All Blacks were probably entering the match as favourites, and are also the defending Tri Nations champions, as well as the number one ranked team in the world.
Revised:  The All Blacks entered the match as favourites, and are also the defending Tri Nations champions, as well as the number one ranked team in the world.
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Original:  The All Blacks preformed  their much talked of Kapa O Pango haka before the match, in an attempt to fire them up, but it was Australia who opened up the scoring in the match, when Chris Lathem offloaded to Mat Rogers who sprinted down the left sidelined and passed to Lote Tuqiri who scored the try.
Revised:  The All Blacks preformed a spirited rendition of their much talked of Kapa O Pango haka before the match, in an attempt to fire them up, but it was Australia who opened up the scoring in the match, when Chris Lathem offloaded to Mat Rogers who sprinted down the left sidelined and passed to Lote Tuqiri who scored the try.
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