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Original:  Throughout the 20th century the dominant model for language processing in the brain was the Geschwind-Lichteim-Wernicke model , which is based primarily on the analysis of brain damaged patients.
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Original:  The auditory dorsal stream in both humans and non-human primates is responsible for sound localization , and is accordingly known as the auditory 'where' pathway.
Revised:  The auditory dorsal stream in both humans and non-human primates is responsible for , and is accordingly known as the auditory 'where' pathway.
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Original: Multiple issues| File:Neurolinguistics.png|alt=|Dual stream connectivity between the auditory cortex and frontal lobe of monkeys and humans.
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Original:  </ul> [[File:Cypron-Range_Orcinus_orca.svg|alt=The range distribution of the killer whale, which extends from Antarctica in the south to the arctic circle in the north.
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Original: In one strip of Peanuts , Linus challenges Snoopy: "Prove to me that you're a real hockey player."
Revised: In the Peanuts comic strip, the gang would play ice hockey during the winter months, usually on outdoor ponds. Snoopy would occasionally join his human friends on the ice (once drawing a two-minute penalty for kissing Lucy on the nose during the face-off). In the off-season, Snoopy would sometimes “skate” barefooted atop his doghouse, wielding his hockey stick, and fantasizing about winning the Stanley Cup. Linus, watching from below, would be the “hockey fans”. In one strip , Linus challenges Snoopy: "Prove to me that you're a real hockey player."
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Original: More recently, the FX show Rescue Me, which stars Denis Leary, has featured hockey games as an integral part of several episodes ;
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Original: More recently, the FX show Rescue Me, which stars Denis Leary, has featured hockey games as an integral part of several episodes ;
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Original: More recently, the FX show Rescue Me, which stars Denis Leary, has featured hockey games as an integral part of several episodes ;
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Original: More recently, the FX show Rescue Me, which stars Denis Leary, has featured hockey games as an integral part of several episodes ;
Revised: More recently, the FX show Rescue Me, which stars Denis Leary, has featured hockey games as an integral part of several episodes .
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Original: PDQ ( Physician Data Query ) is NCI's comprehensive cancer database.
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Original: PDQ ( Physician Data Query ) is NCI's comprehensive cancer database.
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Original: Physician Data Query  is the US National Cancer Institute's (NCI) comprehensive cancer database.
Revised: Physician Data Query (PDQ) is the US National Cancer Institute's (NCI) comprehensive cancer database.
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Original: Arthur Robert Peacocke ( 29 November 1924– 21 October 2006) was a British Anglican theologian and biochemist.
Revised: Arthur Robert Peacocke ( 1924– 21 October 2006) was a British Anglican theologian and biochemist.
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Original: Arthur Robert Peacocke ( 29 November 1924– 21 October 2006) was a British Anglican theologian and biochemist.
Revised: Arthur Robert Peacocke ( 29 November 1924– 2006) was a British Anglican theologian and biochemist.
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Original:  In 1960 he was licensed as a Lay Reader for the Diocese of Oxford and he held this position until 1971, when he was ordained deacon and priest, unusually, both in the same year.
Revised:  In 1960 he was licensed as a lay reader for the Diocese of Oxford and he held this position until 1971, when he was ordained deacon and priest, unusually, both in the same year.
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Original:  He was appointed Honorary Chaplain of Christ Church, Oxford  in 1988 and Honorary Canon in 1994.
Revised:  He was appointed Honorary Chaplain of Christ Church, Oxford , in 1988 and Honorary Canon in 1994.
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Original:  He was appointed Member of the Most Excellent Order of the British Empire by HM The Queen in 1993.
Revised:  He was appointed Member of the Order of the British Empire by HM The Queen in 1993.
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Original:  He was appointed Member of the Most Excellent Order of the British Empire by HM The Queen in 1993.
Revised:  He was appointed Member of the Most Excellent Order of the British Empire by Queen Elizabeth II in 1993.
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Original:  He is perhaps best known for his attempts to argue rigorously that evolution and Christianity need not be at odds (see Creation-evolution controversy).
Revised:  He is perhaps best known for his attempts to argue rigorously that evolution and Christianity need not be at odds (see Creation–evolution controversy).
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Original:  He may be the most well-known theological advocate of theistic evolution as author of the essay "Evolution: The Disguised Friend of Faith?". the actualisation of [evolutionary] potentiality can properly be regarded as the consummation of the purposes of God already incompletely manifested in evolving humanity ….
Revised:  He may be the most well-known theological advocate of theistic evolution as author of the essay "Evolution: The Disguised Friend of Faith?". the actualisation of [evolutionary] potentiality can properly be regarded as the consummation of the purposes of God already incompletely manifested in evolving humanity ....
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Original:  Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948) Dr Arthur Peacocke (1948–1971) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke (1971–1993) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke MBE (1993–1994) The Revd . Canon Arthur Peacocke MBE (1994–2006
Revised:  Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948) Dr Arthur Peacocke (1948–1971) The Revd Dr Arthur Peacocke (1971–1993) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke MBE (1993–1994) The Revd . Canon Arthur Peacocke MBE (1994–2006
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Original:  Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948) Dr Arthur Peacocke (1948–1971) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke (1971–1993) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke MBE (1993–1994) The Revd . Canon Arthur Peacocke MBE (1994–2006
Revised:  Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948) Dr Arthur Peacocke (1948–1971) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke (1971–1993) The Revd Dr Arthur Peacocke MBE (1993–1994) The Revd . Canon Arthur Peacocke MBE (1994–2006
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Original:  Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948) Dr Arthur Peacocke (1948–1971) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke (1971–1993) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke MBE (1993–1994) The Revd . Canon Arthur Peacocke MBE (1994–2006
Revised:  Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948) Dr Arthur Peacocke (1948–1971) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke (1971–1993) The Revd . Dr Arthur Peacocke MBE (1993–1994) The Revd Canon Arthur Peacocke MBE (1994–2006
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Original:  It shows us that "God is the Immanent Creator creating in and through the processes of natural order  " .A. Peacocke, 'Welcoming the "Disguised Friend" - Darwinism and Divinity', in Intelligent Design Creationism and its Critics, ed. R.T. Pennock, Cambridge, Massachusetts : MIT Press, 2001, 473, originalitalics .
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Original:  A. Peacocke, 'Welcoming the "Disguised Friend" - Darwinism and Divinity', in Intelligent Design Creationism and its Critics, ed. R.T. Pennock, Cambridge, Massachusetts : MIT Press, 2001, 474.
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Original:  A. Peacocke, 'Welcoming the "Disguised Friend" - Darwinism and Divinity', in Intelligent Design Creationism and its Critics, ed. R.T. Pennock, Cambridge, Massachusetts : MIT Press, 2001, 475.
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Original:  A. Peacocke, 'Welcoming the "Disguised Friend" - Darwinism and Divinity', in Intelligent Design Creationism and its Critics, ed. R.T. Pennock, Cambridge, Massachusetts : MIT Press, 2001, 476. Chance is to be seen as "eliciting the potentialities that the physical cosmos possessed ab initio."
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Original:  A. Peacocke, 'Welcoming the "Disguised Friend" - Darwinism and Divinity', in Intelligent Design Creationism and its Critics, ed. R.T. Pennock, Cambridge, Massachusetts : MIT Press, 2001, 477. the actualisation of [evolutionary] potentiality can properly be regarded as the consummation of the purposes of God already incompletely manifested in evolving humanity ....
Revised:  the actualisation of [evolutionary] potentiality can properly be regarded as the consummation of the purposes of God already incompletely manifested in evolving humanity ....
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Original:  A. Peacocke, 'Welcoming the "Disguised Friend" - Darwinism and Divinity', in Intelligent Design Creationism and its Critics, ed. R.T. Pennock, Cambridge, Massachusetts : MIT Press, 2001, 484-5.
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Original:  Relationship between theology and science typology In the introduction to The Sciences and Theology in the Twentieth Century, The Sciences and Theology in the Twentieth Century, (ed. A.R. Peacocke , 1981, University of Notre Dame Press, , pp. xiii–xv, xviii Peacocke lists a set of eight relationships that could fall upon a two-dimensional grid.
Revised:  Relationship between theology and science typology In the introduction to The Sciences and Theology in the Twentieth Century, Peacocke lists a set of eight relationships that could fall upon a two-dimensional grid.
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Original:  Both include a confessional and a rational factor. e .g., Theological Science, T. F. Torrance, Oxford University Press, 1969 Science and theology may be integrated Science generates a metaphysic in terms of which theology is then formulated For example, Alfred North Whitehead's metaphysics forms the basis of process theology Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948)
Revised:  Both include a confessional and a rational factor. E .g., Theological Science, T. F. Torrance, Oxford University Press, 1969 Science and theology may be integrated Science generates a metaphysic in terms of which theology is then formulated For example, Alfred North Whitehead's metaphysics forms the basis of process theology Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948)
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Original:  Both include a confessional and a rational factor. e .g., Theological Science, T. F. Torrance, Oxford University Press, 1969 Science and theology may be integrated Science generates a metaphysic in terms of which theology is then formulated For example, Alfred North Whitehead's metaphysics forms the basis of process theology Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948)
Revised:  Both include a confessional and a rational factor. e .g., . Science and theology may be integrated Science generates a metaphysic in terms of which theology is then formulated For example, Alfred North Whitehead's metaphysics forms the basis of process theology Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948)
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Original:  Both include a confessional and a rational factor. e .g., Theological Science, T. F. Torrance, Oxford University Press, 1969 Science and theology may be integrated Science generates a metaphysic in terms of which theology is then formulated For example, Alfred North Whitehead's metaphysics forms the basis of process theology Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948)
Revised:  Both include a confessional and a rational factor. e .g., Theological Science, T. F. Torrance, Oxford University Press, 1969 Science and theology may be integrated Science generates a metaphysic in terms of which theology is then formulated For example, Alfred North Whitehead's metaphysics forms the basis of process Styles and honours Mr Arthur Peacocke (1924–1948)
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Original: Biography Arthur Robert Peacocke was born at Watford on 29 November 1924.
Revised: Biography Arthur Robert Peacocke was born in Watford, England, on 29 November 1924.
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Original:  In 1960 he was licensed as a lay reader for the Diocese of Oxford and he held this position until 1971, when he was ordained deacon and priest, unusually, both in the same year.
Revised:  In 1960 he was licensed as a lay reader for the Diocese of Oxford and he held this position until 1971, when he was ordained deacon and priest, both in the same year.
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Original:  From 1973 until 1984 he was Dean, Fellow, and Tutor and Director of Studies in Theology of Clare College, Cambridge, becoming a Doctor of Science (ScD) by incorporation of the University of Cambridge.
Revised:  From 1973 until 1984 he was Dean, Fellow, of Clare College, Cambridge, becoming a Doctor of Science (ScD) by incorporation of the University of Cambridge.
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Original:  From 1973 until 1984 he was Dean, Fellow, and Tutor and Director of Studies in Theology of Clare College, Cambridge, becoming a Doctor of Science (ScD) by incorporation of the University of Cambridge.
Revised:  From 1973 until 1984 he was Dean, Fellow, and Tutor and Director of Studies in Theology of Clare College, Cambridge, becoming a Doctor of Science by incorporation of the University of Cambridge.
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Original:  Random process of evolution as purposive The random-process-of-evolution-as-purposive argument is perhaps best considered an adjunct to the process-as-immanence argument, and a direct response to Johnson's continued references to evolution as "purposeless .
Revised:  Random process of evolution as purposive The random-process-of-evolution-as-purposive argument is perhaps best considered an adjunct to the process-as-immanence argument, and a direct response to Johnson's continued references to evolution as "purposeless 
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Original:  "  Peacocke suggests
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Original:  He was an Academic Fellow of the Institute on Religion in an Age of Science in 1986.
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Original:  He was Warden of the Society of Ordained Scientists  1987 –92 and Warden Emeritus from 1992 until his death.
Revised:  He was Warden of the Society of Ordained Scientists from 1987 –92 and Warden Emeritus from 1992 until his death.
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Original:  He was Warden of the Society of Ordained Scientists  1987 –92 and Warden Emeritus from 1992 until his death.
Revised:  He was Warden of the Society of Ordained Scientists 1987 to 1992 and Warden Emeritus from 1992 until his death.
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Original:  Arthur Peacocke married Rosemary Mann on 7 August 1948.
Revised:  Arthur Peacocke married Rosemary Mann on 1948.
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Original:  They had a daughter, Jane (born 1953), and a son who is the distinguished philosopher Christopher Peacocke.
Revised:  They had a daughter, and a son who is the distinguished philosopher Christopher Peacocke.
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Original:  Natural evil as necessity The natural-evil-as-necessity argument is meant to be a response to the classic philosophical argument of the Problem of Evil , which contends that an all-powerful, all-knowing and beneficent God cannot exist as such because natural evil (mudslides which crush the legs of innocent children, for instance) occurs.
Revised:  Natural evil as necessity The natural-evil-as-necessity argument is meant to be a response to the classic philosophical argument of the problem of evil , which contends that an all-powerful, all-knowing and beneficent God cannot exist as such because natural evil (mudslides which crush the legs of innocent children, for instance) occurs.
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Original:  He was appointed Honorary Chaplain of Christ Church, Oxford, in 1988 and Honorary Canon in 1994.
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Original:  He was Warden of the Society of Ordained Scientists  from 1987 to 1992 and Warden Emeritus from 1992 until his death.
Revised:  He founded the Society of Ordained Scientists from 1987 to 1992 and Warden Emeritus from 1992 until his death.
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Original:  He was appointed Member of the Order of the British Empire by Queen Elizabeth II in 1993.
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Original:  He founded the Society of Ordained Scientists in 1986 and served as its Warden from 1987 to 1992 and Warden Emeritus from 1992 until his death.
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Original:  He was also a sometime Vice-President of the Modern Church People's Union and member of the council of the European Society for the Study of Science and Theology (Esssat) .
Revised:  He was also a sometime Vice-President of the Modern Church People's Union and member of the council of the European Society for the Study of Science and Theology .
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Original: David Lekuta Rudisha, MBS (born 17 December 1988) is a retired Kenyan middle-distance runner.
Revised: David Lekuta Rudisha, MBS (born 17 December 1988) is a Kenyan middle-distance runner.
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Original:  <ref></ref/ Achievements upRudisha at the 2010 Memorial van Damme.
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Original: Extropianism, also referred to as the philosophy of Extropy , is an "evolving framework of values and standards for continuously improving the human condition".
Revised: Extropianism, also referred to as the philosophy of extropy , is an "evolving framework of values and standards for continuously improving the human condition".
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Original:  It details the ways in which Extropism has evolved away from Extropianism, while continuing to building upon its original tenets.
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Original: Extropy The term 'extropy' , as an antonym to 'entropy' was used in a 1967 academic volume discussing cryogenicsCryogenics, IPC Science and Technology Press, vol. 7, pg. 225 (1967) and in a 1978 academic volume of cybernetics.
Revised: Extropy The term extropy , as an antonym to 'entropy' was used in a 1967 academic volume discussing cryogenicsCryogenics, IPC Science and Technology Press, vol. 7, pg. 225 (1967) and in a 1978 academic volume of cybernetics.
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Original:  The Extropy Institute In 1986 More joined Alcor, a Cryonics company, and helped establish (along with Michael Price, Garret Smyth and Luigi Warren) the first European cryonics organization, Mizar Limited (later Alcor UK).
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Original:  The Extropy Institute In 1986 More joined Alcor, a Cryonics company, and helped establish (along with Michael Price, Garret Smyth and Luigi Warren) the first European cryonics organization, Mizar Limited (later Alcor UK).
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Original: Extropism Extropism is a modern derivation of the transhumanist philosophy of Extropianism .
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Original:  It details the ways in which extropism has evolved away from Extropianism , while continuing to building upon its original tenets.
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Original: Extropism Extropism is a modern derivation of the transhumanist philosophy of extropianism.
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Original:  By the 13th century, water wheels powered sawmills and trip hammers, to full cloth and pound flax and later cotton rags into pulp for making paper.
Revised:  By the 13th century, water wheels powered sawmills and trip hammers, to pull cloth and pound flax and later cotton rags into pulp for making paper.
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Original:  Beginning with the 1900 U.S. census, power use was part of the definition of a factory , distinguishing it from a workshop.
Revised:  Beginning with the 1900 U.S. census, power use was part of the definition of a FACTORY , distinguishing it from a workshop.
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Original:  It controls the operations of different machines automatically.
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Original:  Water powered bellows were in use on blast furnaces in China in 31 AD.
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Original:  Water powered bellows for blast furnaces, used in China in ancient times, were in use in Europe by the 15th century.
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Original:  Rock and ore crushing had been done for centuries by water powered trip hammers, but trip hammers have been replaced by modern ore crushers and ball mills.
Revised:  Rock and ore crushing had been done for centuries by water-powered trip hammers, but trip hammers have been replaced by modern ore crushers and ball mills.
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Original:  and from an operating budget of about $3 million to $323 million.
Revised:  and from an operating budget of about $3 million to $323 
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Original: 1950s births Category:Alaska Native people Category:Alaska Pacific University alumni Category:American health care chief executives Category:American women chief executives Category:American chief executives Category:Living people Category:MacArthur Fellows Category:People from Kenai Peninsula Borough, Alaska Category:People from Kodiak Island Borough, Alaska Category:Year of birth missing (living peopl
Revised: 1950s births Category:Alaska Native people Category:Alaska Pacific University alumni Category:American health care chief executives Category:American women chief executives Category:Living people Category:MacArthur Fellows Category:People from Kenai Peninsula Borough, Alaska Category:People from Kodiak Island Borough, Alaska Category:Year of birth missing (living peopl
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