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Original:  for many claimants, they may only have a mobile phone and be subject to higher charges, or even in a position where a benefit payment has been delayed, and this is their sole contact with the Department of Work and Pensions 9DWP ) when they may be in financial difficulty.
Revised:  for many claimants, they may only have a mobile phone and be subject to higher charges, or even in a position where a benefit payment has been delayed, and this is their sole contact with the Department of Work and Pensions (DWP ) when they may be in financial difficulty.
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Original:  In combination with threats of action by passport office staff in the PCS union, the UK's current coalition government may be faced with significant disruption to essential public services at a time when unemployment figures are climbing  
Revised:  In combination with threats of action by passport office staff in the PCS union, the UK's current coalition government may be faced with significant disruption to essential public services at a time when unemployment figures are climbing . 
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Original:  As-announced yesterday evening, 3,500 staff from UK Jobcentre plus call centres are engaged in industrial action . Centres in Newport and Glasgow were picketed by members this morning as part of a coordinated walk-out at seven of the thirty centres handling benefits and unemployment-related queries for the UK public.
Revised:  As-announced yesterday evening, 3,500 staff from UK Jobcentre plus call centres are engaged in industrial action . Centres in Newport and Glasgow were picketed by members this morning as part of a coordinated strike at seven of the thirty centres handling benefits and unemployment-related queries for the UK public.
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Original:  Wikinews spoke to Katrine Williams, one of the representatives of the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS), and a member of the Civil Service since 1991, to establish the grievances leading to the public-sector strike .
Revised:  Wikinews spoke to Katrine Williams, one of the representatives of the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS), and a member of the Civil Service since 1991, to establish the grievances leading to the public-sector industrial action .
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Original:  In combination with threats of action by passport office staff in the PCS union, the UK's current coalition government may be faced with significant disruption to essential public services at a time when unemployment figures are climbing   .
Revised:  In combination with threats of action by passport office staff in the PCS union, the UK's current coalition government may be faced with significant disruption to essential public services at a time when unemployment figures are climbing . .
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Original: When Wikinews contacted the DWP press office, but only a prepared statement was available.
Revised: When Wikinews contacted the DWP press office, only a prepared statement was available.
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Original:  The third plane was not directly involved and landed  
Revised:  The third plane was not directly involved and landed successfully. 
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Original:  It is unclear if there are any additional injuries    
Revised:  It is unclear if there are any additional injuries . 
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Original:  The display team  was using amateur pilots.
Revised:  The display team reportedly was using amateur pilots.
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Original: Another moderate earthquake has hit SW Pakistan.
Revised: Another moderate earthquake has hit South West Pakistan.
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Original: Another moderate earthquake has hit South West Pakistan.
Revised: A moderate earthquake has hit South West Pakistan.
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Original:  however, under interrogation which included lie detector tests, investigators discovered they had no knowledge of any planned terror attacks on the New York subway system   
Revised:  however, under interrogation which included lie detector tests, investigators discovered they had no knowledge of any planned terror attacks on the New York subway system . 
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Original: The Department of Homeland Security  was skeptical of the threat since it was first announced last week.
Revised: The Department of Homeland Security (DHS) was skeptical of the threat since it was first announced last week.
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Original:  Responding to the new comments from the Department of Homeland Security , New York City Mayor Bloomberg replied, "We've got to take every threat seriously and that is what we are going to do."
Revised:  Responding to the new comments from the DHS , New York City Mayor Bloomberg replied, "We've got to take every threat seriously and that is what we are going to do."
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Original: Barnaby Joyce, an Australian National Party member of Parliament crossed the floor in the Australian Senate October 11 over legislation proposed to authorize mergers without the agreement of the competition watchdog body, the Australian Competition and Consumer Commission.
Revised: Barnaby Joyce, an Australian National Party member of Parliament crossed the floor in the Australian Senate October 11 over legislation proposed to authorise mergers without the agreement of the competition watchdog body, the Australian Competition and Consumer Commission.
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Original:  This is the first time Joyce, a recently elected senator, has crossed the floor in the Senate, and Joyce has suggested that this may not be the last    
Revised:  This is the first time Joyce, a recently elected senator, has crossed the floor in the Senate, and Joyce has suggested that this may not be the last . 
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Original:  This is the first time Joyce, a recently elected senator, has crossed the floor in the Senate, and Joyce has suggested that this may not be the last . Victory of the Opposition Party%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The legislation was not in the headlines - it would have changed sections of the Trade Practices Act to allow company mergers to go ahead without ACCC approval.
Revised:  This is the first time Joyce, a recently elected senator, has crossed the floor in the Senate, and Joyce has suggested that this may not be the last Victory of the Opposition Party%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The legislation was not in the headlines - it would have changed sections of the Trade Practices Act to allow company mergers to go ahead without ACCC approval.
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Original:  This is the first time Joyce, a recently elected senator, has crossed the floor in the Senate, and Joyce has suggested that this may not be the last . Victory of the Opposition Party%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The legislation was not in the headlines - it would have changed sections of the Trade Practices Act to allow company mergers to go ahead without ACCC approval.
Revised:  This is the first time Joyce, a recently elected senator, has crossed the floor in the Senate, and Joyce has suggested that this may not be the last . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The legislation was not in the headlines - it would have changed sections of the Trade Practices Act to allow company mergers to go ahead without ACCC approval.
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Original:  It also shakes the Government, that while they official hold control of both houses of parliament, their margin is 1 on a good day
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Original: category:Australiacategory:Oceaniacategory:Politics and conflicts Barnaby Joyce, an Australian National Party member of Parliament crossed the floor in the Australian Senate October 11 over legislation proposed to permit mergers without the agreement of the competition watchdog body, the Australian Competition and Consumer Commission.
Revised: category:Australiacategory:Oceaniacategory:Politics and conflicts Barnaby Joyce, a National Party member of Parliament crossed the floor in the Australian Senate October 11 over legislation proposed to permit mergers without the agreement of the competition watchdog body, the Australian Competition and Consumer Commission.
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Original:  The Australian Liberal Party/National Party coalition of which Joyce is a member holds a narrow majority of one seat in the Senate and Joyce has stated that he has chosen to exercise his vote in support of the promises made to his electorate prior to the election, rather than be obedient to the directions of the party executive.
Revised:  The Liberal Party/National Party coalition of which Joyce is a member holds a narrow majority of one seat in the Senate and Joyce has stated that he has chosen to exercise his vote in support of the promises made to his electorate prior to the election, rather than be obedient to the directions of the party executive.
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Original:  Marius 'Mario' Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from 51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu    ] ] 
Revised:  Marius "Mario" Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from 51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu ] ] 
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Original:  Marius 'Mario' Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from 51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu    ] ] 
Revised:  Marius 'Mario' Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from 51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu . ] ] 
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Original:  Marius 'Mario' Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from 51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu    ] ] 
Revised:  Marius 'Mario' Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from 51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu h] ] 
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Original:  There, they worked six or seven days each week, sleeping in brothels and having sex with upt to eight-to-ten men each night against their wills.
Revised:  There, they worked six or seven days each week, sleeping in brothels and having sex with up to eight-to-ten men each night against their wills.
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Original:  Bogdan was accused by Rachel Smyth, prosecuting, of giving advise and assistance to Marius;
Revised:  Bogdan was accused by Rachel Smyth, prosecuting, of giving advice and assistance to Marius;
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Original:  The woman were "threatened, beaten and degraded" and faced "extreme sexual violence and humiliation," the court heard   
Revised:  The woman were "threatened, beaten and degraded" and faced "extreme sexual violence and humiliation," the court heard . 
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Original: A father and son from Romania have been found guilty of a string of  offences in the United Kingdom after four yearstrafficking women into and around the UK and forcing them into prostitution.
Revised: A father and son from Romania have been found guilty of a string of prostitution-related offences in the United Kingdom after four yearstrafficking women into and around the UK and forcing them into prostitution.
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Original: A father and son from Romania have been found guilty of a string of  offences in the United Kingdom after four yearstrafficking women into and around the UK and forcing them into prostitution.
Revised: A father and son from Romania have been found guilty of a string of offences in the United Kingdom after four yearstrafficking women into and around the UK , forcing their victims into prostitution.
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Original:  Marius "Mario" Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from  51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu .
Revised:  Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from 51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu .
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Original:  Marius "Mario" Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from  51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu .
Revised:  Marius "Mario" Nejloveanu, 23, was also convicted of a series of rapes and headed the business with guidance from his 51-year-old Bogdan "Uncle" Nejloveanu .
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Original:  Five women were lured from Romania, the youngest in her teens and the oldest 27, with promises of work and romance with Marius.
Revised:  Five women were lured from Romania, the youngest in her teens , the oldest 27, with promises of work and romance with Marius.
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Original:  There, they worked six or seven days each week, sleeping in brothels and having sex with up to eight-to-ten men each night against their wills .
Revised:  There, they worked six or seven days each week, sleeping in brothels and having sex with eight-to-ten men each night against their wills .
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Original:  There, they worked six or seven days each week, sleeping in brothels and having sex with up to eight-to-ten men each night against their wills .
Revised:  There, they worked six or seven days each week, sleeping in brothels and having sex with up to eight-to-ten men each night against their will .
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Original:  Police launched raids and rescued the women after receiving a tip-off.
Revised:  Police launched raids , rescuing the women after receiving a tip-off.
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Original:  The kidnapped , which consisted of the original 18 hostages  and later a 20 man rescue team , were released on Monday.
Revised:  The kidnapped – which consisted of the original 18 hostages and later a 20 man rescue team , were released on Monday.
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Original:  The kidnapped , which consisted of the original 18 hostages  and later a 20 man rescue team , were released on Monday.
Revised:  The kidnapped , which consisted of the original 18 hostages , and later a 20 man rescue team , were released on Monday.
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Original:  The kidnapped , which consisted of the original 18 hostages  and later a 20 man rescue team , were released on Monday.
Revised:  The kidnapped , which consisted of the original 18 hostages and later a 20 man rescue team – were released on Monday.
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Original:  A splinter group of the JEM was blamed for the attack  but Mohamed Saleh, the head of the dissident faction, has denied the allegations.
Revised:  A splinter group of JEM was blamed for the attack but Mohamed Saleh, the head of the dissident faction, has denied the allegations.
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Original:  A splinter group of the JEM was blamed for the attack  but Mohamed Saleh, the head of the dissident faction, has denied the allegations.
Revised:  A splinter group of the JEM was blamed for the attack , but Mohamed Saleh, the head of the dissident faction, has denied the allegations.
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Original:  Saleh was the military head of the Justice and Equality movement when it signed a ceasefire agreement in April  but later split with the group's leadership.
Revised:  Saleh was the military head of JEM when it signed a ceasefire agreement in April but later split with the group's leadership.
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Original:  Saleh was the military head of the Justice and Equality movement when it signed a ceasefire agreement in April  but later split with the group's leadership.
Revised:  Saleh was the military head of the Justice and Equality movement when it signed a ceasefire agreement in April , but later split with the group's leadership.
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Original:  It is said that he now commands "thousands" of troops in the Darfur region  and is looking for a seat at the ongoing peace talks.
Revised:  It is said that he now commands "thousands" of troops in the Darfur region , and is looking for a seat at the ongoing peace talks.
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Original:  He has accused the AU of taking sides and has stated that he will not honour the ceasefire.
Revised:  He accused the AU of taking sides and has stated that he will not honour the ceasefire.
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Original:  He has accused the AU of taking sides and has stated that he will not honour the ceasefire.
Revised:  He has accused the AU of taking sides , and stated that he will not honour the ceasefire.
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Original:  While speaking with Reuters  Saleh said, "We want the AU to leave  and we have warned them not to travel to our areas.
Revised:  While speaking with Reuters , Saleh said, "We want the AU to leave and we have warned them not to travel to our areas.
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Original:  While speaking with Reuters  Saleh said, "We want the AU to leave  and we have warned them not to travel to our areas.
Revised:  While speaking with Reuters Saleh said, "We want the AU to leave , and we have warned them not to travel to our areas.
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Original:  Three personnel were killed in attacks believed to be perpetrated by the Sudan Liberation Army  . Despite the violence, the SLA, JEM, and the AU have promised to continue the peace talks which are being held in Abuja
Revised:  Three personnel were killed in attacks believed to be perpetrated by the Sudan Liberation Army (SLA) . Despite the violence, the SLA, JEM, and the AU have promised to continue the peace talks which are being held in Abuja
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Original: frame|Darfur refugees Forces from the Sudanese rebel group, the Justice and Equality Movement (JEM), have assisted in liberating 38 African Union (AU) personnel that were taken hostage on Sunday.
Revised:  Forces from the Sudanese rebel group, the Justice and Equality Movement (JEM), have assisted in liberating 38 African Union (AU) personnel that were taken hostage on Sunday.
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Original:  The newest taikonauts will also stay in orbit longer, five days compared to the 21 hour, 14 orbit flight of Shenzhou V  
Revised:  The newest taikonauts will also stay in orbit longer, five days compared to the 21 hour, 14 orbit flight of Shenzhou V . 
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Original:  This civil suit demands 500 million baht (approx. 12 million US dollars or 10 million Euros ).
Revised:  This civil suit demands 500 million baht (approx. 12 million US dollars or 10 million euros ).
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Original: The Thai Prime Minister, Thaksin Shinawatra, has filed criminal and civil suits against Manager Media Group plc, the publisher of a Thai-language newspaper, Manager Daily, which printed a sermon by a well-respected Buddhist monk that contained scathing criticism of the Prime Minister .
Revised: The Thai Prime Minister, Thaksin Shinawatra, has filed criminal and civil suits against Manager Media Group plc, the publisher of a Thai-language newspaper, Manager Daily, which printed a sermon by the well-respected Buddhist monk that contained scathing criticism of the Prime Minister .
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Original:  The Thai Prime Minister, Thaksin Shinawatra, has filed criminal and civil suits against Manager Media Group plc, the publisher of a Thai-language newspaper, Manager Daily, which printed a sermon by the well-respected Buddhist monk w: Luangta Maha Bua that compared the Thai Prime Minister to Phra Devadhat, the Thai Buddhist equivalent of the devil.
Revised:  The Thai Prime Minister, Thaksin Shinawatra, has filed criminal and civil suits against Manager Media Group plc, the publisher of a Thai-language newspaper, Manager Daily, which printed a sermon by the well-respected Buddhist monk Luangta Maha Bua that compared the Thai Prime Minister to Phra Devadhat, the Thai Buddhist equivalent of the devil.
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Original:  The Thai Prime Minister, Thaksin Shinawatra, has filed criminal and civil suits against Manager Media Group plc, the publisher of a Thai-language newspaper, Manager Daily, which printed a sermon by the well-respected Buddhist monk w: Luangta Maha Bua that compared the Thai Prime Minister to Phra Devadhat, the Thai Buddhist equivalent of the devil.
Revised:  The Thai Prime Minister, Thaksin Shinawatra, has filed criminal and civil suits against Manager Media Group plc, the publisher of a Thai-language newspaper, Manager Daily, which printed a sermon by the well-respected Buddhist monk w: Luangta Maha Bua that compared the Thai Prime minister to Phra Devadhat, the Thai Buddhist equivalent of the devil.
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Original:       United Nations officials are warning of a growing threat of measles, cholera, and diarrhea outbreaks among the millions of survivors.
Revised:  "I'm so happy because my life partner is coming back to me and now we can start a whole new life together. Thank you, thank you, thank you, Turkey," he said. United Nations officials are warning of a growing threat of measles, cholera, and diarrhea outbreaks among the millions of survivors.
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Original:  There have been no reports of epidemic outbreaks so far, but the area's health infrastructure has completely collapsed, Vandemoortele said  
Revised:  There have been no reports of epidemic outbreaks so far, but the area's health infrastructure has completely collapsed, Vandemoortele said . 
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Original:  There have been no reports of epidemic outbreaks so far, but the area's health infrastructure has completely collapsed, Vandemoortele said  
Revised:  There have been no reports of epidemic outbreaks so far, but the area's health infrastructure has completely collapsed, Vandemoortele said Mir
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Original: Miracles amongst the Carnage Turkish rescuers saved a 45-year-old Pakistani mother of three from the rubble of her home in Muzaffarabad, 105 hours after it collapsed in the massive South Asian earthquake.
Revised:  Turkish rescuers saved a 45-year-old Pakistani mother of three from the rubble of her home in Muzaffarabad, 105 hours after it collapsed in the massive South Asian earthquake.
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Original: Miracles amongst the Carnage Turkish rescuers saved a 45-year-old Pakistani mother of three from the rubble of her home in Muzaffarabad, 105 hours after it collapsed in the massive South Asian earthquake.
Revised: Miracles amongst the Carnage 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Unfolding over five hours, Rashida Farooq, 45, was pulled to safety amid cheers of about 100 locals who had watched the drama.
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Original:  Her husband, Mahmood Farooq Marchal, 48, a shopkeeper, was elated.
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Original:  UN Officials worried about Disease United Nations officials are warning of a growing threat of measles, cholera, and diarrhea outbreaks among the millions of survivors.
Revised:  United Nations officials are warning of a growing threat of measles, cholera, and diarrhea outbreaks among the millions of survivors.
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Original:  There have been no reports of epidemic outbreaks so far, but the area's health infrastructure has completely collapsed, Vandemoortele said . Mir
Revised:  There have been no reports of epidemic outbreaks so far, but the area's health infrastructure has completely collapsed, Vandemoortele said Mir
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Original:  There have been no reports of epidemic outbreaks so far, but the area's health infrastructure has completely collapsed, Vandemoortele said . Mir
Revised:  There have been no reports of epidemic outbreaks so far, but the area's health infrastructure has completely collapsed, Vandemoortele said . 
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Original: While Aid starts to pour in to the worst hit areas of South Asia Earthquake that has killed more than 30,000 people, bad weather is hampering the relief efforts with Snow falling on the peaks of the earthquake-devastated areas of Pakistan.
Revised: While Aid starts to pour in to the worst hit areas of South Asia Earthquake that has killed more than 30,000 people, bad weather is hampering the relief efforts with snow falling on the peaks of the earthquake-devastated areas of Pakistan.
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