wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Infants under two years old have been prevented from boarding planes at U.S. airports because their names are on the United States' "no-fly list" , even though government advice is not to stop children under twelve . Parents miss flights while they scramble to have babies' passports faxed to authorities.
Revised: Infants under two years old have been prevented from boarding planes at U.S. airports because their names are on the United States' "no-fly list" . Parents miss flights while they scramble to have babies' passports faxed to authorities.
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Original:  But the Transport Safety Administration, which maintains the list, has told airlines that children under twelve should not be stopped from boarding or be subject to additional checks, even if their names are on the list.
Revised:  But the Transport Safety Administration, which maintains the list, has told airlines that children under twelve should not be stopped from boarding or subjected to additional checks, even if their names are on the list.
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Original:   Critics of the list, such as the American Civil Liberties Union, say not enough detail is provided on the list to accurately identify who it is meant to be targeting, resulting in innocents being caught by it .
Revised:  Critics of the list, such as the American Civil Liberties Union, say not enough detail is provided on the list to accurately identify who it is meant to be targeting, resulting in innocents being snagged .
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Original:  However at least one attempt by the government to improve the process was abadnoned after fears it would include too much personal information.
Revised:  At least one attempt by the government to improve the process was abadnoned after fears it would include too much personal information.
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Original:  However at least one attempt by the government to improve the process was abadnoned after fears it would include too much personal information.
Revised:  However at least one attempt by the government to improve the process was abandoned after fears it would include too much personal information.
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Original:  The TSA is investigaing 89 children who either complained themselves that their name is on the list, or had complaints filed on their behalf.
Revised:  The TSA is investigating 89 children who either complained themselves that their name is on the list, or had complaints filed on their behalf.
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Original:  Fourteen of them are babies under two  
Revised:  Fourteen of them are babies under two . 
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Original:  The airlines director general was stranded in the United Kingdom on the basis of a  court order obtained by Kuwait Airways last month  .
Revised:  The airline's director general was stranded in the United Kingdom on the basis of a court order obtained by Kuwait Airways last month .
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Original: Iraq and Kuwait are in dispute over billions of dollars of reparations , this includes around $1.2bn  aircraft and parts seized between 1990 and 1991 by Saddam Hussein.
Revised: Iraq and Kuwait are in dispute over billions of dollars of reparations ; this includes around $1.2bn aircraft and parts seized between 1990 and 1991 by Saddam Hussein.
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Original: Iraq and Kuwait are in dispute over billions of dollars of reparations , this includes around $1.2bn  aircraft and parts seized between 1990 and 1991 by Saddam Hussein.
Revised: Iraq and Kuwait are in dispute over billions of dollars of reparations , this includes around $1.2bn in aircraft and parts seized between 1990 and 1991 by Saddam Hussein.
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Original:  Hassan spoke about the plans to dissolve the company, he said " We  can establish another airline company and put an end to this case.
Revised:  Hassan spoke about the plans to dissolve the company, saying that " We can establish another airline company and put an end to this case.
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Original:  Hassan spoke about the plans to dissolve the company, he said " We  can establish another airline company and put an end to this case.
Revised:  Hassan spoke about the plans to dissolve the company, he said " w can establish another airline company and put an end to this case.
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Original:  Hassan spoke about the plans to dissolve the company, he said " We  can establish another airline company and put an end to this case.
Revised:  Hassan spoke about the plans to dissolve the company, he said " We e can establish another airline company and put an end to this case.
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Original:  On April 25th  Iraqi Airways sent its first jet to London, United Kingdom in 20 years.
Revised:  On April 25th , Iraqi Airways sent its first jet to London, United Kingdom in 20 years.
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Original:  On April 25th  Iraqi Airways sent its first jet to London, United Kingdom in 20 years.
Revised:  On April 25th Iraqi Airways sent its first jet to the United Kingdom in 20 years.
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Original:  On April 25th  Iraqi Airways sent its first jet to London, United Kingdom in 20 years.
Revised:  On April 25th Iraqi Airways sent its first jet to London, United Kingdom in twenty years.
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Original:  this includes around $1.2bn in aircraft and parts seized between 1990 and 1991 by Saddam Hussein.
Revised:  this includes around $1.2bn in aircraft and parts seized beginning in 1990 and 1991 by Saddam Hussein.
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Original:  this includes around $1.2bn in aircraft and parts seized between 1990 and 1991 by Saddam Hussein.
Revised:  this includes around $1.2bn in aircraft and parts seized between 1990 by Saddam Hussein.
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Original:  The flight had been delayed for over a year and was meet with further restrictions for nine days after the volcanic ash crisis in Europe.
Revised:  The flight had been delayed for over a year and was met with further restrictions for nine days after the volcanic ash crisis in Europe.
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Original: File:Iraqi airways at Baghadad international airport.jpg|An Iraqi Airways flight at Baghdad International Airport Iraqi Airways have announced that they are to drop all flights to the United Kingdom and Sweden.
Revised:  Iraqi Airways have announced that they are to drop all flights to the United Kingdom and Sweden.
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Original:  He said Phelan was a well known and respected member of the Seanad , as well as being his constituency colleague and life-long friend .
Revised:  He said Phelan was a well known and respected member of Seanad Éireann. He is a constituency colleague of mine and a lifelong friend. I will miss him deeply," he said .
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Original:  Most of his victims were prostitutes  
Revised:  Most of his victims were prostitutes . 
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Original:  Most of his victims were prostitutes . Related new
Revised:  Most of his victims were prostitutes Related new
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Original:  Most of his victims were prostitutes . Related new
Revised:  Most of his victims were prostitutes . 
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Original:  Space Shuttle Atlantis landed Wednesday, May 26, in Kennedy Space Centre, Florida, after 11 days, 18 hours and 4.8 million miles in space on mission STS-132.
Revised:  Space Shuttle Atlantis landed Wednesday, May 26, at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, after 11 days, 18 hours and 4.8 million miles in space on mission STS-132.
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Original:  The Shuttle landed at 08:48:18 EDT (12:48 UTC), at runway 33 of the Shuttle Landing Facility for the last time Wednesday.
Revised:  The Shuttle landed at 08:48:18 EDT (12:48 UTC), on runway 33 of the Shuttle Landing Facility for the last time Wednesday.
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Original:  STS-132 Commander Ken Ham echoed these sentiments Mission STS-132 carried the Russian-built Mini Research Module Rassvet and an Integrated Cargo Carrier-Vertical Light Deployable (ICC-VLD) to the International Space Station, and featured three spacewalks, after docking with the station on Flight Day 3, May 16. thumbnail|Atlantis docked to the ISS It was Space Shuttle Atlantis' 32nd mission and also it's last, completing almost 25 years of service.
Revised:  STS-132 Commander Ken Ham said of the landing. Mission STS-132 carried the Russian-built Mini Research Module Rassvet and an Integrated Cargo Carrier-Vertical Light Deployable (ICC-VLD) to the International Space Station, and featured three spacewalks, after docking with the station on Flight Day 3, May 16. thumbnail|Atlantis docked to the ISS It was Space Shuttle Atlantis' 32nd mission and also it's last, completing almost 25 years of service.
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Original:  STS-132 Commander Ken Ham echoed these sentiments Mission STS-132 carried the Russian-built Mini Research Module Rassvet and an Integrated Cargo Carrier-Vertical Light Deployable (ICC-VLD) to the International Space Station, and featured three spacewalks, after docking with the station on Flight Day 3, May 16. thumbnail|Atlantis docked to the ISS It was Space Shuttle Atlantis' 32nd mission and also it's last, completing almost 25 years of service.
Revised:  STS-132 Commander Ken Ham echoed these sentiments Mission STS-132 carried the Russian-built Mini Research Module Rassvet and an Integrated Cargo Carrier-Vertical Light Deployable (ICC-VLD) to the International Space Station, and featured three spacewalks, after docking with the station on Flight Day 3, May 16. thumbnail|Atlantis docked to the ISS It was Space Shuttle Atlantis' 32nd mission and also its last, completing almost 25 years of service.
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Original:  Space Shuttle Atlantis landed Wednesday, May 26, at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, after 11 days, 18 hours and 4.8 million miles in space on mission STS-132 .
Revised:  Space Shuttle Atlantis landed Wednesday, May 26, at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, after 11 days, 18 hours and 4.8 million miles in space on mission STS-132 
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Original:  Along with Atlantis, the Space Shuttles Endeavour and Discovery will also be retired in 2010.
Revised:  Along with Atlantis, the and will also be retired in 2010.
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Original:  A tsunami bulletin was issued by the Pacific Tsunami Warning Center and small tsunamis were observed thereafter  (1) (2).
Revised:  A tsunami bulletin was issued by the Pacific Tsunami Warning Center and small tsunamis were observed thereafter . (1) (2).
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Original: Electric supply ceased due to the earthquake in the Miyagi Prefecture and in its southern neighbor, Fukushima Prefecture, and 17,000 housholds in total have been affected  .
Revised: Electric supply ceased due to the earthquake in the Miyagi Prefecture and in its southern neighbor, Fukushima Prefecture, and 17,000 households in total have been affected .
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Original:  A four year old fell from a four meter height in in an Istanbul, Turkey shopping centre and was saved by a quick thinking shopkeeper.
Revised:  A four year old fell from a four meter height in an Istanbul, Turkey shopping centre and was saved by a quick thinking shopkeeper.
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Original:  A four year old fell from a four meter height in in an Istanbul, Turkey shopping centre and was saved by a quick thinking shopkeeper.
Revised:  A four year old fell from a four meter height in in an Istanbul, Turkey shopping centre and was saved by a quick-thinking shopkeeper.
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Original:  The child grabbed onto the handrail of a moving escalator and climbed up the outside edge of it  Ali Apan, was a nearby shopkeeper  saw the boy climbing the escalator.
Revised:  The child grabbed onto the handrail of a moving escalator and climbed up the outside edge of it . Ali Apan, was a nearby shopkeeper saw the boy climbing the escalator.
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Original:  The child grabbed onto the handrail of a moving escalator and climbed up the outside edge of it  Ali Apan, was a nearby shopkeeper  saw the boy climbing the escalator.
Revised:  The child grabbed onto the handrail of a moving escalator and climbed up the outside edge of it Ali Apan, a nearby shopkeeper saw the boy climbing the escalator.
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Original:  The child grabbed onto the handrail of a moving escalator and climbed up the outside edge of it  Ali Apan, was a nearby shopkeeper  saw the boy climbing the escalator.
Revised:  The child grabbed onto the handrail of a moving escalator and climbed up the outside edge of it Ali Apan, was a nearby shopkeeper , saw the boy climbing the escalator.
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Original:  The family’s should take better care of their children.” Arapi had just had a brain operation a month before this incident, and Arapi could have been badly injured himself, if the child had hit his head instead of his arms.
Revised:  The families should take better care of their children.” Arapi had just had a brain operation a month before this incident, and Arapi could have been badly injured himself, if the child had hit his head instead of his arms.
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Original:  This was not, however  the first incident of a child falling from an escalator  .
Revised:  This was not, however , the first incident of a child falling from an escalator .
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Original:  The following incident occurred four days later when a 2 year old was rushed to the hospital after riding halfway up the outside of the escalator.
Revised:  The following incident occurred four days after a 2 year old was rushed to the hospital after riding halfway up the outside of the escalator.
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Original:  The following incident occurred four days after a 2 year old was rushed to the hospital after riding halfway up the outside of the escalator.
Revised:  The following incident occurred four days after a two-year old was rushed to the hospital after riding halfway up the outside of the escalator.
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Original:  In 2006 both a 16 year old and a 3 year old had died from falling from escalators in Turkey
Revised:  In 2006 both a sixteen-year old and a 3 year old had died from falling from escalators in Turkey
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Original:  In 2006 both a 16 year old and a 3 year old had died from falling from escalators in Turkey
Revised:  In 2006 both a 16 year old and a three-year old had died from falling from escalators in Turkey
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Original:  The child grabbed onto the handrail of a moving escalator and climbed up the outside edge of it.
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Original:  As the boy fell, Apan positioned himself to catch the toddler as he fell off the escalator eight feet above him.
Revised:  As the boy fell, Apari positioned himself to catch the toddler as he fell off the escalator eight feet above him.
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Original:  As the boy fell, Apan positioned himself to catch the toddler as he fell off the escalator eight feet above him.
Revised:  As the boy fell, Apan positioned himself to catch the toddler as he fell off eight feet above him.
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Original:  In 2006 both a sixteen-year old and a three-year old had died from falling from escalators in Turkey
Revised:  In 2006 a sixteen-year old and a three-year old had died from falling from escalators in Turkey
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Original:  In 2006 both a sixteen-year old and a three-year old had died from falling from escalators in Turkey
Revised:  In 2006 both a sixteen-year old and a three-year old died falling from escalators in Turkey
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Original: Noticing that the child was dangling to the handrail Apari ran below the boy as the four year old neared the railing at the top of the shopping centre escalator.
Revised: Noticing that the child was dangling from the handrail Apari ran below the boy as the four year old neared the railing at the top of the shopping centre escalator.
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Original:  CCTV  cameras catching images of  the child riding on the outside of the escalator and Ali Apari's sure-handed catch.
Revised:  CCTV cameras catching images of both the child riding on the outside of the escalator and Ali Apari's sure-handed catch.
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Original:  This was not , however, the first incident of a child falling from  an escalator at that shopping mall.
Revised:  However this is not the first incident of a child falling from an escalator at that shopping mall.
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Original:  This was not , however, the first incident of a child falling from  an escalator at that shopping mall.
Revised:  This was not , however, the first incident of a child falling from riding an escalator at that shopping mall.
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Original:  This was not , however, the first incident of a child falling from  an escalator at that shopping mall.
Revised:  This was not , however, the first incident of a child falling from an escalator at the shopping mall.
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Original:  The following incident occurred four days after a two-year old was rushed to the hospital after riding halfway up the outside of the escalator.
Revised:  The following incident occurred four days after a two-year old had to be rushed to hospital after falling from halfway up the outside of the escalator.
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Original:  The following incident occurred four days after a two-year old was rushed to the hospital after riding halfway up the outside of the escalator.
Revised:  The following incident occurred four days after a two-year old was rushed to the hospital after riding halfway up the escalator.
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Original:  After these incidents the shopping mall has attempted to thwart attempts to ride the outside of the escalator by impeding access with huge flower pots.
Revised:  After these falls the shopping mall has attempted to thwart attempts to ride the outside of the escalator by impeding access with huge flower pots.
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Original:  After these incidents the shopping mall has attempted to thwart attempts to ride the outside of the escalator by impeding access with huge flower pots.
Revised:  After these incidents the shopping mall has attempted to thwart attempts to ride the outside of the escalators by impeding access with huge flower pots.
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Original:  After these incidents the shopping mall has attempted to thwart attempts to ride the outside of the escalator by impeding access with huge flower pots.
Revised:  After these incidents the shopping mall has attempted to thwart attempts to ride the outside of the escalator by impeding access with flower pots.
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Original:  CCTV security cameras catching images of both the child riding on the outside of the escalator and Ali Apari's sure-handed catch.
Revised:  CCTV security cameras caught images of both the child riding on the outside of the escalator and Ali Apari's sure-handed catch.
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Original: A four year old Istanbul toddler was saved from serious injury by a quick-thinking shopkeeper, who caught the boy as he fell the 13 feet from the floor above.
Revised: A four year old Istanbul toddler was saved from serious injury by a quick-thinking shopkeeper, who caught the boy as he fell the thirteen feet from the floor above.
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Original:  A four-year-old Istanbul toddler was saved from serious injury by a quick-thinking shopkeeper, who caught the boy as he fell the thirteen feet (four meters) from the floor above.
Revised:  A four-year-old toddler was saved from serious injury by a quick-thinking shopkeeper, who caught the boy as he fell the thirteen feet (four meters) from the floor above.
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Original:  CCTV security cameras caught images of both the child riding on the outside of the escalator and Ali Apari's sure-handed catch.
Revised:  security cameras caught images of both the child riding on the outside of the escalator and Ali Apari's sure-handed catch.
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Original:  This oil spill occured at Pump Station 9. 40 persons had been evacuated from the Fort Greely site, and the Prudhoe Bay station has been reduced by 84\%.
Revised:  This oil spill occured at Pump Station 9. 40 people had been evacuated from the Fort Greely site, and the Prudhoe Bay station has been reduced by 84\%.
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Original:  BP addressed a 267,000 gallon crude oil spill in Prudhoe Bay, Alaska in the spring of 2006 resulting in a lawsuit against BP Exploration
Revised:  BP addressed a 267,000 gallon crude oil spill in Prudhoe Bay, Alaska in 2006 resulting in a lawsuit against BP Exploration
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Original:  However  Foxconn claims that the suicides were mostly the result of relationship problems unrelated to it's own management style and for a work force of over 800,000 the number of suicides is small.
Revised:  However , Foxconn claims that the suicides were mostly the result of relationship problems unrelated to it's own management style and for a work force of over 800,000 the number of suicides is small.
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Original:  However  Foxconn claims that the suicides were mostly the result of relationship problems unrelated to it's own management style and for a work force of over 800,000 the number of suicides is small.
Revised:  However Foxconn claims that the suicides were mostly the result of relationship problems unrelated to its own management style and for a work force of over 800,000 the number of suicides is small.
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Original:  However  Foxconn claims that the suicides were mostly the result of relationship problems unrelated to it's own management style and for a work force of over 800,000 the number of suicides is small.
Revised:  However Foxconn claims that the suicides were mostly the result of relationship problems unrelated to it's own management style , and they argue that for a work force of over 800,000 the number of suicides is small.
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Original:  However  Foxconn claims that the suicides were mostly the result of relationship problems unrelated to it's own management style and for a work force of over 800,000 the number of suicides is small.
Revised:  However Foxconn claims that the suicides were mostly the result of relationship problems unrelated to it's own management style and for a work force so large the number of suicides is small.
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Original:  The procedure has worked before in surface situations, but was  tested at 5,000 feet underwater.
Revised:  The procedure has worked before in surface situations, but was not previously tested at 5,000 feet underwater.
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Original:  The procedure has worked before in surface situations, but was not previously tested at 5,000 feet underwater.
Revised:  The procedure has worked before in surface situations, but was not previously attempted at 5,000 feet underwater.
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Original:  The LMRP Cap is in place and the procedure is expected to take four days to complete
Revised:  The LMRP Cap is at the scene and the procedure is expected to take four days to complete
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Original:  The LMRP Cap is at the scene and the procedure is expected to take four days to complete  
Revised:  The LMRP Cap is at the scene and the procedure is expected to take four days to complete . 
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Original:  This procedure involves a robot using a saw to cut off the leaking pipe and place a cap on the pipe.
Revised:  This procedure involves a ROV using a saw to cut off the leaking pipe and place a cap on the pipe.
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Original:  Researchers don't blame specific brands, but blame bottled water in general.
Revised:  Researchers don't blame specific brands, but bottled water in general.
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Original:  The reason behind this is that there is an unusually high rate of heterotrophic bacteria in the bottled water, even more than 500 cfu, the legal limit  on how much bacteria should be present in drinking water in Canada.
Revised:  A random study found unusually high rates of heterotrophic bacteria in the bottled water, even more than 500 cfu, the legal limit on how much bacteria should be present in drinking water in Canada.
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