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Original:  Attacking a soldier on patrol close to a U.S. outpost, the attackers had two bomb vehicles.
Revised:  Attacking a soldier on patrol close to a U.S. outpost, the insurgents had two bomb vehicles.
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Original:  The attack was designed to draw out U.S. support troops and then use the second bomb vehicle along with mortars and rockets  to overrun the  outpost.
Revised:  The attack was designed to draw out U.S. support troops while the second bomb vehicle along with mortars and rockets to overrun the outpost.
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Original:  The attack was designed to draw out U.S. support troops and then use the second bomb vehicle along with mortars and rockets  to overrun the  outpost.
Revised:  The attack was designed to draw out U.S. support troops and then use the second bomb vehicle in conjunction with mortars and rockets to overrun the outpost.
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Original:  The attack was designed to draw out U.S. support troops and then use the second bomb vehicle along with mortars and rockets  to overrun the  outpost.
Revised:  The attack was designed to draw out U.S. support troops and then use the second bomb vehicle along with mortars and rockets was intended to overrun the outpost.
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Original: Don Dees reported they came under automatic weapon and rocket-propelled grenade fire . Approximately 15 U.S. casualties in addition to the dead before U.S. air strikes forced the insurgents to retreat,  U.S. military spokesman Lieutenant Colonel Paul Hastings said.
Revised: Don Dees reported they came under automatic weapon and rocket-propelled grenade fire . Approximately 15 U.S. casualties in addition to the dead before U.S. air strikes forced the insurgents to retreat, U.S. military spokesman said.
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Original:  Situation in Mosul Mosul , Iraq's third-largest city , has become a hotbed of insurgent activity in the past several months.
Revised:  Lack of control in Mosul Mosul , Iraq's third-largest city , has become a hotbed of insurgent activity in the past several months.
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Original:  Situation in Mosul Mosul , Iraq's third-largest city , has become a hotbed of insurgent activity in the past several months.
Revised:  Situation in Mosul Mosul is Iraq's third-largest city , has become a hotbed of insurgent activity in the past several months.
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Original:  Situation in Mosul Mosul , Iraq's third-largest city , has become a hotbed of insurgent activity in the past several months.
Revised:  Situation in Mosul Mosul , Iraq's third-largest city and has become a hotbed of insurgent activity in the past several months.
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Original:  This latest clash comes as the U.S. has begun a new push in the  "triangle of death" south of the capital, attempting to secure the region in the lead-up to the January 30 elections.
Revised:  This latest clash comes as the U.S. has begun a new push in the so-called "triangle of death" south of the capital, attempting to secure the region in the lead-up to the January 30 elections.
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Original:  This latest clash comes as the U.S. has begun a new push in the  "triangle of death" south of the capital, attempting to secure the region in the lead-up to the January 30 elections.
Revised:  This latest clash comes as the U.S. has begun a new push in the "triangle of death" south of the capital, attempting to secure the region in the lead-up to the elections.
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Original:  Tony Stewart followed Kahne in seventh, while Kurt Busch could only manage eighth   
Revised:  Tony Stewart followed Kahne in seventh, while Kurt Busch could only manage eighth . 
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Original:  Hendrick Motorsports driver Jeff Gordon , who qualified 20th, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2011 Subway Fresh Fit 500 held on Sunday at Phoenix International Raceway in Avondale , Arizona, United States.
Revised:  driver , who qualified 20th, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2011 Subway Fresh Fit 500 held on Sunday at Phoenix International Raceway in Avondale , Arizona, United States.
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Original:  Hendrick Motorsports driver Jeff Gordon , who qualified 20th, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2011 Subway Fresh Fit 500 held on Sunday at Phoenix International Raceway in Avondale , Arizona, United States.
Revised:  Hendrick Motorsports driver Jeff Gordon , who qualified 20th, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2011 Subway Fresh Fit 500 held on Sunday at in , Arizona, United States.
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Original:  This became his first Sprint Cup win of the season .
Revised:  This became his first Sprint Cup win of the .
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Original:  Throughout the course of the race there were eight cautions and 29 lead changes among twelve different drivers.
Revised:  Throughout the course of the race there were eight and 29 lead changes among twelve different drivers.
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Original:  With ten laps remaining in the 312 lap race, Kyle Busch was first, but Gordon passed him one lap later.
Revised:  With ten laps remaining in the 312 lap race, was first, but Gordon passed him one lap later.
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Original:  Jimmie Johnson took third, ahead of Kevin Harvick in fourth.
Revised:  took third, ahead of Kevin Harvick in fourth.
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Original:  Jimmie Johnson took third, ahead of Kevin Harvick in fourth.
Revised:  Jimmie Johnson took third, ahead of in fourth.
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Original:  Ryan Newman managed the fifth position, after starting 14th on the grid.
Revised:  managed the fifth position, after starting 14th on the grid.
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Original:  Kasey Kahne , from the Red Bull Racing Team team, clinched the sixth position, after leading none of the laps during the race.
Revised:  , from the Red Bull Racing Team team, clinched the sixth position, after leading none of the laps during the race.
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Original:  Kasey Kahne , from the Red Bull Racing Team team, clinched the sixth position, after leading none of the laps during the race.
Revised:  Kasey Kahne , from the team, clinched the sixth position, after leading none of the laps during the race.
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Original:  Tony Stewart followed Kahne in seventh, while Kurt Busch could only manage eighth.
Revised:  followed Kahne in seventh, while Kurt Busch could only manage eighth.
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Original:  Tony Stewart followed Kahne in seventh, while Kurt Busch could only manage eighth.
Revised:  Tony Stewart followed Kahne in seventh, while could only manage eighth.
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Original:  The race will be televised on at 3:00 p.m. 
Revised:  The race will be televised on at 3:00 p.m. EST
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Original: Phoenix International Raceway , the race track where the race was held. driver , who qualified 20th, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2011 Subway Fresh Fit 500 held on Sunday at in , Arizona, United States.
Revised:  driver , who qualified 20th, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2011 Subway Fresh Fit 500 held on Sunday at in , Arizona, United States.
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Original:  Throughout the course of the race there were eight and 29 lead changes among twelve different drivers   .
Revised:  Throughout the course of the race there were eight and 29 lead changes among twelve different drivers . .
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Original:  , from the team , clinched the sixth position, after leading none of the laps during the race. followed Kahne in seventh, while could only manage eighth.
Revised:  , from the , clinched the sixth position, after leading none of the laps during the race. followed Kahne in seventh, while could only manage eighth.
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Original:  This became his first Sprint Cup win of the  .
Revised:  This became his first Sprint Cup win of the season .
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Original: In email from one of Brown's aids . "Please schedule Joe Scarborough this evening...
Revised: In email from one of Brown's aids : "Please schedule Joe Scarborough this evening...
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Original:  Hundreds still being rescued from homes"  In  email from one of Brown's aids: "Please schedule Joe Scarborough this evening...
Revised:  Hundreds still being rescued from homes" In an email from one of Brown's aids: "Please schedule Joe Scarborough this evening...
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Original:  Gievn[sic] that Baton Rouge is back to normal, restaurants are getting busy " Related documents%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% pdfs of the email
Revised:  Gievn[sic] that Baton Rouge is back to normal, restaurants are getting busy Related documents%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% pdfs of the email
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Original:  Gievn[sic] that Baton Rouge is back to normal, restaurants are getting busy " Related documents%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% pdfs of the email
Revised:  Gievn[sic] that Baton Rouge is back to normal, restaurants are getting busy " %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% pdfs of the email
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Original:  Gievn[sic] that Baton Rouge is back to normal, restaurants are getting busy " Related documents%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% pdfs of the email
Revised:  Gievn[sic] that Baton Rouge is back to normal, restaurants are getting busy " Related documents%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  The Icecreamists, the marketing company involved with the desert known as 'Baby Gaga', are fully co-operating with tests which are currently ongoing.
Revised:  The Icecreamists, the marketing company involved with the desert known as 'Baby Gaga', are fully co-operating with officials who are carrying out tests that are currently ongoing.
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Original:  To meet the requirements of blood donors, the milk is given a screening .
Revised:  According to the company, all milk is screened for the "highest and safest" standards before it is and prepared for human consumption .
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Original:  It is then before being mixed in with the zest of lemons and vanilla seed cases.
Revised:  It is then mixed with the zest of lemons and vanilla seed cases.
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Original:  The Icecreamists, the marketing company involved with the desert known as 'Baby Gaga', are fully co-operating with officials who are carrying out tests that are currently ongoing.
Revised:  The Icecreamists, the marketing company involved with the dessert known as 'Baby Gaga', are fully co-operating with officials who are carrying out tests that are currently ongoing.
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Original: In a industrial relations conference in Melbourne this week, Minister Kevin Andrews has released that the government's new industrial relations legislation is likely to be introduced sometime next week in the lower house.
Revised: In an industrial relations conference in Melbourne this week, Minister Kevin Andrews has released that the government's new industrial relations legislation is likely to be introduced sometime next week in the lower house.
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Original:   John Howard has contended that the new reforms are neccessary to keep our economy competitive and update outdated laws.
Revised:  Prime Minister John Howard has contended that the new reforms are neccessary to keep our economy competitive and update outdated laws.
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Original:  However the opposition says a new class of working poor will be created in Australia under the Government's planned industrial relations (IR ) changes.
Revised:  However the opposition says a new class of working poor will be created in Australia under the Government's planned IR changes.
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Original:  The Senate employment committee will also hold an inquiry into the legislation , which according to Mr Andrews  will probably run for a week in the non-sitting period of parliament.
Revised:  The Senate employment committee will hold an inquiry into the legislation , which according to Mr Andrews will probably run for a week in the non-sitting period of parliament.
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Original:  The Senate employment committee will also hold an inquiry into the legislation , which according to Mr Andrews  will probably run for a week in the non-sitting period of parliament.
Revised:  The Senate employment committee will also hold an inquiry into the legislation . According to Mr Andrews will probably run for a week in the non-sitting period of parliament.
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Original:  He said the legislation would then be debated in the Senate in the last sitting weeks of the year , in December .
Revised:  He said the legislation would then be debated in the Senate in the last sitting weeks of the year .
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Original:  The new workplace reforms have emoted widespread controversy from both sides of the political spectrum , with the Australian Council of Trade Unions launching TV advertisements to counter the government's new legislation.
Revised:  The new workplace reforms have emoted widespread controversy from both sides of the political spectrum . The Australian Council of Trade Unions launching TV advertisements to counter the government's new legislation.
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Original:  The new workplace reforms have emoted widespread controversy from both sides of the political spectrum , with the Australian Council of Trade Unions launching TV advertisements to counter the government's new legislation.
Revised:  The new workplace reforms have emoted widespread controversy from both sides of the political spectrum , with the Australian Council of Trade Unions launched TV advertisements to counter the government's new legislation.
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Original:  The 100 million dollar 'Work Choices' advertisements by the Australian Government has also drawn much critisism as a political use of taxpayers dollars.
Revised:  The 100 million dollar 'Work Choices' advertisements by the Australian Government has been critisised as a political use of taxpayers dollars.
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Original:  However the opposition says a new class of working poor will be created in Australia under the Government's planned IR changes.
Revised:  The opposition says a new class of working poor will be created in Australia under the Government's planned IR changes.
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Original:  However the opposition says a new class of working poor will be created in Australia under the Government's planned IR changes.
Revised:  However the opposition says a new class of working poor will be created in Australia under the planned IR changes.
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Original:  Among the changes are a plan to deny Centrelink payments to anyone who refuses a job  .
Revised:  One proposed change will deny Centrelink welfare payments to anyone who refuses a job .
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Original: The new workplace reforms have emoted widespread controversy from both sides of the political spectrum.
Revised: The new workplace reforms have evoked widespread controversy from both sides of the political spectrum.
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Original:  However, Labor's Stephen Smith has rejected such claims "What we will end up with is people being forced onto inferior wages, inferior conditions and the great risk is that we end up with a working poor just as you find in the United States,"  Michael Raper, spokesperson for the National Welfare Rights Network says it is a severe penalty.
Revised:  However, Labor's Stephen Smith has rejected such claims "What we will end up with is people being forced onto inferior wages, inferior conditions and the great risk is that we end up with a working poor just as you find in the United States," '' Michael Raper, spokesperson for the National Welfare Rights Network says it is a severe penalty.
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Original:  The University of Sydney has released a report card on the changes available 
Revised:  The University of Sydney has released a report card on the changes available .
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Original: December 30, 2004 Loki Torrent, a site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement on December 14, 2004, but has decided to mount a legal defense.
Revised:  Loki Torrent, a site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement on December 14, 2004, but has decided to mount a legal defense.
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Original: December 30, 2004 Loki Torrent, a site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement on December 14, 2004, but has decided to mount a legal defense.
Revised: December 30, 2004 LokiTorrent, a web site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement on December 14, 2004, but has decided to mount a legal defense.
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Original: December 30, 2004 Loki Torrent, a site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement on December 14, 2004, but has decided to mount a legal defense.
Revised: December 30, 2004 Loki Torrent, a site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement Dec. 14, 2004, but has decided to mount a legal defense.
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Original: December 30, 2004 Loki Torrent, a site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement on December 14, 2004, but has decided to mount a legal defense.
Revised: December 30, 2004 Loki Torrent, a site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement on December 14, but has decided to mount a legal defense.
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Original:  The site operators have set up a legal defense fund in order to raise the $30,000 per month they estimate will be necessary to cover legal costs.
Revised:  The site operators set up a legal defense fund in order to raise the $30,000 per month they estimate will be necessary to cover legal costs.
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Original:  Loki Torrent's popularity had increased dramatically in recent days after the prominent BitTorrent site SuprNova.org shut down in a pre-emptive move to avoid a lawsuit
Revised:  Loki Torrent's popularity has increased dramatically in recent days after the prominent BitTorrent site SuprNova.org shut down in a pre-emptive move to avoid a lawsuit
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Original: LokiTorrent, a web  site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement Dec. 14,  but has decided to mount a legal defense.
Revised: LokiTorrent, a web site that tracks links to BitTorrent files, was sued by the motion picture industry for copyright infringement on December 14, but has decided to mount a legal defense.
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Original:  The site operators  set up a legal defense fund in order to raise the $30,000 per month they estimate will be necessary to cover legal costs.
Revised:  The site operators have set up a legal defense fund in order to raise the $30,000 per month they estimate will be necessary to cover legal costs.
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Original:  Loki Torrent's popularity has increased dramatically in recent days after the prominent BitTorrent site SuprNova.org shut down in a pre-emptive move to avoid a lawsuit
Revised:  Loki Torrent's popularity had increased dramatically in recent days after the prominent BitTorrent site SuprNova.org shut down in a pre-emptive move to avoid a lawsuit
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Original: Marking the anniversary of an incident at Tak Bai police station which led to 78 people suffocating while being detained by the Thai army, relatives of the deceased have filed a lawsuit with the Pattani provincial court .
Revised: Marking the anniversary of an incident at Tak Bai police station which led to 78 people suffocating while being detained by the Thai army, relatives of the deceased plan to file a lawsuit with the Pattani provincial court .
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Original: Marking the anniversary of an incident at Tak Bai police station which led to 78 people suffocating while being detained by the Thai army, relatives of the deceased have filed a lawsuit with the Pattani provincial court .
Revised: Marking the anniversary of an incident at Tak Bai police station which led to 78 people suffocating while being detained by the Thai army, relatives of the deceased have filed a lawsuit with the Pattani provincial court 
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Original: Despite the imposition of Martial law, attacks on police, government officials, schools and military compounds continued  .
Revised: Despite the imposition of Martial law, attacks on police, government officials, schools and military compounds continued unabated .
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Original:  The second lawsuit was filed by a group of 17 of the protesters who were injured in the clash with police and security forces;
Revised:  The second lawsuit was filed by a group of seventeen of the protesters who were injured in the clash with police and security forces;
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Original:  The aftermath of the Tak Bai incident saw many of the protestors seeking asylum in neighbouring Malaysia.
Revised:  The aftermath of the Tak Bai incident saw many of the protesters seeking asylum in neighbouring Malaysia.
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Original: The Telecommunications Commission of the Solomon Islands (TCSI) have increased a fine to a Papua New Guinea (PNG) mobile phone provider, for failing to meet the deadlines set out in the terms of its license. bemobile, the second largest provider of Mobile Service in the Solomon Islands, was supposed to have covered 50\% of the Solomons by September 2010 and 75\% by February 1st 2011.
Revised: The Telecommunications Commission of the Solomon Islands (TCSI) have increased a fine to a Papua New Guinea (PNG) mobile phone provider, for failing to meet the deadlines set out in the terms of its license. bemobile, the second provider of Mobile Service in the Solomon Islands, was supposed to have covered 50\% of the Solomons by September 2010 and 75\% by February 1st 2011.
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Original: The Telecommunications Commission of the Solomon Islands (TCSI) have increased a fine to a Papua New Guinea (PNG) mobile phone provider, for failing to meet the deadlines set out in the terms of its license. bemobile, the second provider of Mobile Service in the Solomon Islands, was supposed to have covered 50\% of the Solomons by September 2010 and 75\% by February 1st 2011.
Revised: The Telecommunications Commission of the Solomon Islands (TCSI) has issued a fine to a Papua New Guinea (PNG) mobile phone provider, for failing to meet the deadlines set out in the terms of its license. bemobile, the second provider of Mobile Service in the Solomon Islands, was supposed to have covered 50\% of the Solomons by September 2010 and 75\% by February 1st 2011.
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Original: The National Statistics office and the TCSI investigated claims by bemobile that it had covered 64\% of the Islands, and the claims were found to be incorrect.
Revised: The National Statistics Office and the TCSI investigated claims by bemobile that it had covered 64\% of the Islands, and the claims were found to be incorrect.
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Original: The National Statistics office and the TCSI investigated claims by bemobile that it had covered 64\% of the Islands, and the claims were found to be incorrect.
Revised: The National Statistics office and the TCSI investigated claims by bemobile that it had covered 64\% of the Islands, but found the claims were found to be incorrect.
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Original: The National Statistics office and the TCSI investigated claims by bemobile that it had covered 64\% of the Islands, and the claims were found to be incorrect.
Revised: The National Statistics office and the TCSI investigated claims by bemobile that it had covered 64\% of the Islands, and the claims were incorrect.
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