wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: A lawmaker in California who resigned from the California Assembly Wednesday after a videotape was leaked showing him bragging about his sexual escapades to a fellow lawmaker during a legislative session says that his "decision to resign is in no way an admission that [he] had an affair or affairs." Earlier this week, a videotape was sent to news outlets with the offending scenario present .
Revised: A lawmaker in California who resigned from the California Assembly Wednesday says that his "decision to resign is in no way an admission that [he] had an affair or affairs." Earlier this week, a videotape was sent to news outlets with the offending scenario present .
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Original: A lawmaker in California who resigned from the California Assembly Wednesday after a videotape was leaked showing him bragging about his sexual escapades to a fellow lawmaker during a legislative session says that his "decision to resign is in no way an admission that [he] had an affair or affairs." Earlier this week, a videotape was sent to news outlets with the offending scenario present .
Revised: A lawmaker in California who resigned from the California Assembly Wednesday after a videotape was leaked showing him bragging about his sexual escapades to a fellow lawmaker during a legislative session says that his "decision to resign is in no way an admission that [he] had an affair or affairs." Earlier this week, a videotape was leaked to news outlets with the offending scenario present .
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Original:  In the tape, Duvall, 54, relates to Jeff Miller (R-Corona) a story of a recent liaison with a woman he refers to by her fondness for tiny "eye patch" underwear.
Revised:  On the tape, Duvall, 54, relates to Jeff Miller (R-Corona) a story of a recent liaison with a woman he refers to by her fondness for tiny "eye patch" underwear.
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Original: "She passed away this morning at 07.25 ( 14.25 UTC ) ," said administrator Emma Camanag of the Western Convalescent Hospital.
Revised: "She passed away this morning at 07.25 14.25 UTC ) ," said administrator Emma Camanag of the Western Convalescent Hospital.
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Original: "She passed away this morning at 07.25 ( 14.25 UTC ) ," said administrator Emma Camanag of the Western Convalescent Hospital.
Revised: "She passed away this morning at 07.25 ( 14.25 UTC ," said administrator Emma Camanag of the Western Convalescent Hospital.
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Original:  Baines, who was born on April 6, 1894, became the world's oldes person in January this year, after Maria de Jesus, a Portuguese woman, died aged 115.
Revised:  Baines, who was born on April 6, 1894, became the world's oldest person in January this year, after Maria de Jesus, a Portuguese woman, died aged 115.
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Original: The deceased, who some friends have identified as Leah Kubik,  was exploring a building at 1 Spadina Crescent with a male companion around 2  a.m.  . She attempted to make a jump to another section of the building and was leaning on a fence which collapsed, resulting in a three-story fall into a courtyard below.
Revised: The deceased, which some reports say was Leah Kubik, was exploring a building at 1 Spadina Crescent with a male companion around 2 a.m. . She attempted to make a jump to another section of the building and was leaning on a fence which collapsed, resulting in a three-story fall into a courtyard below.
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Original: The deceased, who some friends have identified as Leah Kubik,  was exploring a building at 1 Spadina Crescent with a male companion around 2  a.m.  . She attempted to make a jump to another section of the building and was leaning on a fence which collapsed, resulting in a three-story fall into a courtyard below.
Revised: The deceased, who some friends have identified as Leah Kubik, was exploring a building at 1 Spadina Crescent with a male companion around 2 :00 a.m. . She attempted to make a jump to another section of the building and was leaning on a fence which collapsed, resulting in a three-story fall into a courtyard below.
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Original:  CBC says the two had finished a first date when tehy decided to explore the building.
Revised:  Police say the two had finished a first date when tehy decided to explore the building.
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Original:  Kubik was pronounced dead at St Michael's Hospital  . Police are continuing their investigation, but according to the Toronto Star, the pair had been drinking alcohol.
Revised:  Kubik was taken to St Michael's Hospital . Police are continuing their investigation, but according to the Toronto Star, the pair had been drinking alcohol.
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Original: The deceased, which some reports say was Leah Kubik, aged 29, was exploring a building at 1 Spadina Crescent with a male companion around 2:00 a.m. (EDT).
Revised: The deceased, which some reports say was Leah Kubik, was exploring a building at 1 Spadina Crescent with a male companion around 2:00 a.m. (EDT).
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Original:  She attempted to make a jump to another section of the building and was leaning on a fence which collapsed , resulting in a three-story fall into a courtyard below.
Revised:  She attempted to make a jump from one section of the building and was leaning on a fence which collapsed , resulting in a three-story fall into a courtyard below.
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Original:  Police are continuing their investigation, but according to the Toronto Star, the pair had been drinking alcohol.
Revised:  According to the Toronto Star, the pair had been drinking alcohol.
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Original:  Police  say the two had finished a first date and were walking home when they decided to explore the building , but could not confirm that they were hunting ghosts .
Revised:  Police say the two had finished a first date and were walking home when they decided to explore the building .
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Original: 1 Spadina Crescent at the University of Toronto.
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Original:  In her interview with Ebony, Pinkett-Smith said the school's purpose was not to convert individuals into another belief system: "That is straight evil to think I would bring families into that educational institution and then try to get them to convert into some religion."
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Original: [[File:Michael Jackson (1988).jpg|Michael Jackson in 1988 ]] The concert was originally due to take place on September 26, 2009, just outside the Schoenbrunn Palace in Vienna, Austria  However, the concert has been relocated to the Wembley Stadium in London, England.
Revised: [[File:Michael Jackson (1988).jpg|Michael Jackson in 1988 ]] The concert was originally due to take place on September 26, 2009, just outside the Schoenbrunn Palace in Vienna, Austria . However, the concert has been relocated to the Wembley Stadium in London, England.
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Original:  He also had a stint in Total Nonstop  Wrestling were he was suspended and later released for missing shows.
Revised:  He also had a stint in Total Nonstop Action Wrestling were he was suspended and later released for missing shows.
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Original:  He was robbed by pirates, attacked in Tibet by a rabid dog, escaped marriage in Nepal and was arrested in India  & 
Revised:  He was robbed by pirates, attacked in Tibet by a rabid dog, escaped marriage in Nepal and was arrested in India . & 
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Original:  FOX News says the test could be performed as early as September 20 or as lat as October 10.
Revised:  FOX News says the test could be performed as early as September 20 or as late as October 10.
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Original:  Road traffic accidents acounted for 10\% of deaths. pregnancy and associated risks killed 15\% of the young women that die   
Revised:  Road traffic accidents acounted for 10\% of deaths. pregnancy and associated risks killed 15\% of the young women that died 
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Original:  It has desrcribed the majority of these deaths as preventable and suggested solutions to the problems.
Revised:  It has described the majority of these deaths as preventable and suggested solutions to the problems.
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Original:  97\% of the 2.6 million fatalities anually occur in low- and middle-income countries.
Revised:  97\% of the 2.6 million fatalities annually occur in low- and middle-income countries.
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Original:  Road traffic accidents acounted for 10\% of deaths. pregnancy and associated risks killed 15\% of the young women that died 6.3\% of the deaths were suicides and 6\% were down to violence.
Revised:  Road traffic accidents acounted for 10\% of deaths. Pregnancy and associated risks killed 15\% of the young women that died 6.3\% of the deaths were suicides and 6\% were down to violence.
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Original:  Most of the deaths were in sub-Saharan Africa and Southeast Asia, which was also the only place where male death were not above those of females, as much of the maternal mortality occured here.
Revised:  Most of the deaths were in sub-Saharan Africa and Southeast Asia, which was also the only place where male death were not above those of females, as much of the maternal mortality occurred here.
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Original:  More people killed themselves than were killed by violence The study said safer speed limits, more use of helmets and setbelts and better enforcement of drink driving law could greatly curb the road deaths.
Revised:  More people killed themselves than were killed by violence The study said safer speed limits, more use of helmets and seatbelts and better enforcement of drink driving law could greatly curb the road deaths.
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Original:  Alcoholaccess reduction was also requested.
Revised:  Alcohol access reduction was also requested.
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Original:  Road traffic accidents acounted for 10\% of deaths.
Revised:  Road traffic accidents accounted for 10\% of deaths.
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Original:  Maternal deaths and sexually transmitted desease rates could be cut by sexual education, safe abortion clinics, pregnancy support, HIV testing and treatment and access to contraceptives.
Revised:  Maternal deaths and sexually transmitted disease rates could be cut by sexual education, safe abortion clinics, pregnancy support, HIV testing and treatment and access to contraceptives.
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Original:  The study was conducted by University College London's Russell Viner, World Health Organisation 's Krishna Bose and George Patton of the Royal Children's Hospital in Melbourne, Australia
Revised:  The study was conducted by University College London's Russell Viner, World Health Organization 's Krishna Bose and George Patton of the Royal Children's Hospital in Melbourne, Australia
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Original:  Pregnancy and associated risks killed 15\% of the young women that died In developed countries, 32\% of the deaths were down to road accidents.
Revised:  In developed countries, 32\% of the deaths were down to road accidents.
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Original:  More people killed themselves than were killed by violence The study said safer speed limits, more use of helmets and seatbelts and better enforcement of drink driving law could greatly curb the road deaths.
Revised:  The study said safer speed limits, more use of helmets and seatbelts and better enforcement of drink driving law could greatly curb the road deaths.
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Original:  " " There has long been an assumption that young people are healthy, fit and they don't die," explained the report's lead author, Australian children's health expert George Patton.
Revised:  " There has long been an assumption that young people are healthy, fit and they don't die," explained the report's lead author, Australian children's health expert George Patton.
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Original:   I've certainly heard politicians and policy-makers make statements of that kind...
Revised:  He goes on to say " I've certainly heard politicians and policy-makers make statements of that kind...
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Original: Road accidents killed 10\% of all deceased young people Pregnancy and associated risks killed 15\% of the young women that died A World Health Organisation study published in The Lancet has revealed the main causes of death for people aged 10-24.
Revised: Road accidents killed 10\% of all deceased young people Pregnancy and associated risks killed 15\% of the young women that died A World Health Organisation study published in The Lancet has revealed the main causes of death for people aged 10–24.
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Original:  15\% of female deaths were down to "maternal mortality" which included pregnancy complications, unsafe abortions  and mutilation of genitals.
Revised:  15\% of female deaths were down to "maternal mortality" which included pregnancy complications, unsafe abortions , and mutilation of genitals.
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Original:  Most of the deaths were in sub-Saharan Africa and Southeast Asia , which was also the only place where male death were not above those of females, as much of the maternal mortality occurred here .
Revised:  Most of the deaths were in sub-Saharan Africa and Southeast Asia . Africa and Southeast Asia were also the only place where male death were not above those of females, as much of the maternal mortality occurred here .
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Original:  Most of the deaths were in sub-Saharan Africa and Southeast Asia , which was also the only place where male death were not above those of females, as much of the maternal mortality occurred here .
Revised:  Most of the deaths were in sub-Saharan Africa and Southeast Asia , which was also the only places where male deaths were not above those of females, as much of the maternal mortality occurred here .
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Original:  Most of the deaths were in sub-Saharan Africa and Southeast Asia , which was also the only place where male death were not above those of females, as much of the maternal mortality occurred here .
Revised:  Most of the deaths were in sub-Saharan Africa and Southeast Asia , which was also the only place where male death were not above those of females, as much of the maternal mortality occurred there .
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Original:  The study said safer speed limits, more use of helmets and seatbelts  and better enforcement of drink driving law could greatly curb the road deaths.
Revised:  The study said safer speed limits, more use of helmets and seatbelts , and better enforcement of drink driving law could greatly curb the road deaths.
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Original:  The study said safer speed limits, more use of helmets and seatbelts  and better enforcement of drink driving law could greatly curb the road deaths.
Revised:  The study said safer speed limits, more use of helmets and seatbelts and better enforcement of drunk driving law could greatly curb the road deaths.
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Original:  Maternal deaths and sexually transmitted disease rates could be cut by sexual education, safe abortion clinics, pregnancy support, HIV testing and treatment  and access to contraceptives.
Revised:  Maternal deaths and sexually transmitted disease rates could be cut by sexual education, safe abortion clinics, pregnancy support, HIV testing and treatment , and access to contraceptives.
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Original:  It also sought reduction of availability of poisons, firearms  and other dangerous items.
Revised:  It also sought reduction of availability of poisons, firearms , and other dangerous items.
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Original:  In the case of suicide, the study said more work was needed to help young people recover from acts of violence, sexual assault  and child abuse in both the short and long term.
Revised:  In the case of suicide, the study said more work was needed to help young people recover from acts of violence, sexual assault , and child abuse in both the short and long term.
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Original:  Even though just approved, wireless devices have been available on the the market for over 2 years, running on what is known as " Draft N " or " Pre-N ".
Revised:  Even though just approved, wireless devices have been available on the the market for over two years, running on what is known as " Draft N " or " Pre-N ".
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Original:  Even though just approved, wireless devices have been available on the the market for over 2 years, running on what is known as " Draft N " or " Pre-N ".
Revised:  Even though just approved, wireless devices have been available on the the market for over 2 years, running on what is known as " draft n " or " Pre-N ".
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Original:  Even though just approved, wireless devices have been available on the the market for over 2 years, running on what is known as " Draft N " or " Pre-N ".
Revised:  Even though just approved, wireless devices have been available on the the market for over 2 years, running on what is known as " Draft N " or " pre-N ".
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Original:  The speeds of 802.11n are substantially faster than that of its predecessors with a maximum theoretical throughput of 600Mbit/s  
Revised:  The speeds of 802.11n are substantially faster than that of its predecessors with a maximum theoretical throughput of 600Mbit/s . 
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Original:  The path to ratification began on September 11, 2003 with 11  drafts of the specification being approved over the course of six years.
Revised:  The path to ratification began on September 11, 2003 with 11 drafts of the specification over the course of six years.
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Original:  This will allow it to be backwards compilable with 802.11a, 802.11b and 802.11g, provided that the base station has dual radios.
Revised:  This will allow it to be backwards compatible with 802.11a, 802.11b and 802.11g, provided that the base station has dual radios.
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Original:  According to a US military spokesman, the initial scuffle was an apparant escape attempt.
Revised:  According to a US military spokesman, the initial scuffle was an apparent escape attempt.
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Original:  Under Saddam Hussein the jail was used for mass detention and murder of politically inconvinient people, and US soliders have been cought torturing and sexually abusing prisoners, sparking public outrage and heping fuel the insurgency
Revised:  Under Saddam Hussein the jail was used for mass detention and murder of politically inconvenient people, and US soliders have been cought torturing and sexually abusing prisoners, sparking public outrage and heping fuel the insurgency
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Original:  Under Saddam Hussein the jail was used for mass detention and murder of politically inconvinient people, and US soliders have been cought torturing and sexually abusing prisoners, sparking public outrage and heping fuel the insurgency
Revised:  Under Saddam Hussein the jail was used for mass detention and murder of politically inconvinient people, and US soldiers have been caught torturing and sexually abusing prisoners, sparking public outrage and heping fuel the insurgency
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Original:  Under Saddam Hussein the jail was used for mass detention and murder of politically inconvinient people, and US soliders have been cought torturing and sexually abusing prisoners, sparking public outrage and heping fuel the insurgency
Revised:  Under Saddam Hussein the jail was used for mass detention and murder of politically inconvinient people, and US soliders have been cought torturing and sexually abusing prisoners, sparking public outrage and helping fuel the insurgency
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Original: Wardens has been searching for drugs and banned items such as mobile phones when three inmates started a fire by burning a mattress.
Revised: Wardens had been searching for drugs and banned items such as mobile phones when three inmates started a fire by burning a mattress.
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Original:   Bruce Forsyth.
Revised:  The move comes as part of efforts to cut down the BBC's costs. Bruce Forsyth.
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Original:  Bruce Forsyth . Bruce Forsyth , presenter of the popular British dancing television competition series Strictly Come Dancing, shown on BBC One, has had his salary cut from £650,000 to £550,000 ($1,085,000 to $918,000) - a pay cut of roughly 6.5\%  . In an interview with BBC Two news programme Newsnight, Forsyth said: "We have always been overpaid, but it's the demand - it's like theatre, you will only command a high salary if [you] 'put bums on seats'.
Revised:  Bruce Forsyth . Bruce Forsyth , presenter of the popular British dancing television competition series Strictly Come Dancing, shown on BBC One, has had his salary cut from £650,000 to £550,000 ($1,085,000 to $918,000) - a pay cut of roughly 6.5\% . In an interview with BBC Two news programme Newsnight, Forsyth said: "We have always been overpaid, but it's the demand - it's like theatre, you will only command a high salary if [you] 'put bums on seats'.
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Original:  This move comes as part of efforts to cut down the BBC's costs.
Revised:  This move comes as part of efforts to reduce the BBC's costs.
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Original:  He commented that he was perfectly happy with the situation because, in his opinion, "entertainers get paid far too much".
Revised:  He commented that he accepted the need for cuts, stating that in his opinion, "entertainers get paid far too much".
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Original:  When asked about whether he accepted the pay cut or not, Bruce answered: "Yes - and I think everybody has done it with goodwill because these are very, very hard times and it's only right."
Revised:  When asked about whether he had taken a pay cut or not, Bruce answered: "Yes - and I think everybody has done it with goodwill because these are very, very hard times and it's only right."
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Original:  We've always been overpaid but it's the demand and what's available. "
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Original:  When asked about whether he  had taken a pay cut or not , Bruce answered: "Yes - and I think everybody has done it with goodwill because these are very, very hard times and it's only right."
Revised:  When asked about whether he personally had taken a pay cut or not , Bruce answered: "Yes - and I think everybody has done it with goodwill because these are very, very hard times and it's only right."
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Original:  When asked about whether he  had taken a pay cut or not , Bruce answered: "Yes - and I think everybody has done it with goodwill because these are very, very hard times and it's only right."
Revised:  When asked about whether he had taken a pay cut , Bruce answered: "Yes - and I think everybody has done it with goodwill because these are very, very hard times and it's only right."
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Original:  In June 2009, the BBC had told 100 celebrities that they would be getting their salaries reduced - or " cutting its top talent bill" - as part of the corporation's plan to save money.
Revised:  In June 2009, the BBC had told 100 celebrities that they would be getting their salaries reduced in an effort to cut its " cutting its top talent bill" - as part of the corporation's plan to save money.
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Original:  In June 2009, the BBC had told 100 celebrities that they would be getting their salaries reduced - or " cutting its top talent bill" - as part of the corporation's plan to save money.
Revised:  In June 2009, the BBC had told 100 celebrities that they would be getting their salaries reduced - or " top talent bill" - as part of the corporation's plan to save money.
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Original:  Famous people include current BBC Radio 2 breakfast show disc jockey Sir Terry Wogan, BBC Radio 1 breakfast show DJ Chris Moyles  and Alan Davies, who has a starring role in BBC One drama Jonathan Creek
Revised:  Famous people include current BBC Radio 2 breakfast show disc jockey Sir Terry Wogan, Radio 1 breakfast show DJ Chris Moyles and Alan Davies, who has a starring role in BBC One drama Jonathan Creek
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