wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  In women with cancer , a testing for the level of anti-Müllerian hormone (AMH) is useful in predicting the long-term post-chemotherapy loss of ovarian function, in turn predicting the need for fertility preservation strategies  . Aging Fertility preservation, such as ovarian tissue or oocyte cryopreservation, may also be used to prevent infertility, as well as birth defects, associated with advanced maternal age.
Revised:  Prior to females undergoing these treatments , a testing for the level of anti-Müllerian hormone (AMH) is useful in predicting the long-term post-chemotherapy loss of ovarian function, in turn predicting the need for fertility preservation strategies . Aging Fertility preservation, such as ovarian tissue or oocyte cryopreservation, may also be used to prevent infertility, as well as birth defects, associated with advanced maternal age.
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Original:  In women with cancer , a testing for the level of anti-Müllerian hormone (AMH) is useful in predicting the long-term post-chemotherapy loss of ovarian function, in turn predicting the need for fertility preservation strategies  . Aging Fertility preservation, such as ovarian tissue or oocyte cryopreservation, may also be used to prevent infertility, as well as birth defects, associated with advanced maternal age.
Revised:  In women with cancer , a testing for the level of anti-Müllerian hormone (AMH) is useful in predicting the long-term post-chemotherapy loss of ovarian function, in turn predicting the need for fertility preservation strategies in the future . Aging Fertility preservation, such as ovarian tissue or oocyte cryopreservation, may also be used to prevent infertility, as well as birth defects, associated with advanced maternal age.
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Original:  In women with cancer , a testing for the level of anti-Müllerian hormone (AMH) is useful in predicting the long-term post-chemotherapy loss of ovarian function, in turn predicting the need for fertility preservation strategies  . Aging Fertility preservation, such as ovarian tissue or oocyte cryopreservation, may also be used to prevent infertility, as well as birth defects, associated with advanced maternal age.
Revised:  In women with cancer , a testing for the level of anti-Müllerian hormone (AMH) is useful in predicting the long-term post-chemotherapy loss of ovarian function, in turn predicting the need for fertility preservation strategies . Ageing Increasing age in females is directly associated with decreasing reproductive potential. This can be the result of many factors such as the amount of eggs available and their overall reproductive quality. Fertility preservation, such as ovarian tissue or oocyte cryopreservation, may also be used to prevent infertility, as well as birth defects, associated with advanced maternal age.
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Original:  The resulting embryo is then frozen until the woman is in remission from disease.
Revised:  The resulting embryo is then frozen until the female's is in remission from disease.
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Original:  When the woman is ready to initiate pregnancy, the embryo is thawed and implanted into the uterus for maturation and birth.
Revised:  When the female's is ready to initiate pregnancy, the embryo is thawed and implanted into the uterus for maturation and birth.
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Original:  While this option is the most common fertility preservation method in women , it is not available to pre-pubescent girls, who do not have mature eggs that can be fertilized.
Revised:  While this option is the most common fertility preservation method in females , it is not available to pre-pubescent girls, who do not have mature eggs that can be fertilized.
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Original:  Women who do not have a partner will need to use donor sperm.
Revised:  females who do not have a partner will need to use donor sperm.
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Original:  Alternative methods of hormonal stimulation using letrozole or tamoxifen may be used for women with hormone-sensitive cancers.
Revised:  Alternative methods of hormonal stimulation using letrozole or tamoxifen may be used for females with hormone-sensitive cancers.
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Original:  The resulting embryo can be implanted into the woman's uterus after her endometrium (the lining of the uterus) is stimulated with hormones to prepare for the development of the embryo.
Revised:  The resulting embryo can be implanted into the female's's uterus after her endometrium (the lining of the uterus) is stimulated with hormones to prepare for the development of the embryo.
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Original:  Others In women requiring local pelvic radiation therapy may benefit from surgical transposition of the ovaries to a site remote from maximal radiation exposure.
Revised:  Others In females requiring local pelvic radiation therapy may benefit from surgical transposition of the ovaries to a site remote from maximal radiation exposure.
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Original:  This risk has a potential to be further increased in women undergoing controlled ovarian hyperstimulation for fertility preservation, but is usually only associated with cases of ovarian hyperstimulation syndrome (OHSS).
Revised:  This risk has a potential to be further increased in females undergoing controlled ovarian hyperstimulation for fertility preservation, but is usually only associated with cases of ovarian hyperstimulation syndrome (OHSS).
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Original:  Therefore, the recommended controlled ovarian hyperstimulation protocol for in women with cancer is an antagonist protocol using a GnRH agonist for final maturation induction, in order to decrease the risk of OHSS.
Revised:  Therefore, the recommended controlled ovarian hyperstimulation protocol for in females with cancer is an antagonist protocol using a GnRH agonist for final maturation induction, in order to decrease the risk of OHSS.
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Original:  Anticoagulant prophylaxis is recommended to be administered only to selected subgroups of women such as those with other risk factors of hypercoagulability or those who do develop early OHSS.
Revised:  Anticoagulant prophylaxis is recommended to be administered only to selected subgroups of females such as those with other risk factors of hypercoagulability or those who do develop early OHSS.
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Original:  Category:Transgender Category:Reproduction Category:Puberty Category:Puberty blockers Category:Fertility medicine Category:Fertility Category:Cancer Adverse effects Compared with the general population, people with cancer have a higher risk of arterial thrombotic events such as stroke, myocardial infarction and peripheral arterial embolism.
Revised:  Adverse effects Compared with the general population, people with cancer have a higher risk of arterial thrombotic events such as stroke, myocardial infarction and peripheral arterial embolism.
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Original:  Adverse effects Compared with the general population, people with cancer have a higher risk of arterial thrombotic events such as stroke, myocardial infarction and peripheral arterial embolism.
Revised: Table 1: Main Options of Fertility Preservation MethodProcessAdvantages and DisadvantagesFurther ConsiderationsOocyte cryopreservation Halt GAHT (gender affirming hormone therapy) and carry out ovarian stimulation with transvaginal oocyte retrieval. Cryopreserve mature oocytes. No sperm necessary at time of retrieval, can be used later for fertilisation. Clinically available. Has to be carried out after puberty. Invasive procedure. Those with female partners, donor sperm may be required, the embryo can then be transferred to the partners uterus. Individuals with male partners can use partner's sperm but will need a surrogate to carry the embryo. Embryo cryopreservation Halt GAHT and carry out ovarian stimulation to harvest oocytes. Fertilisation of mature oocytes and embryo cryopreservation. Clinically available. Need sperm at time of oocyte retrieval. Has to be carried out after puberty. Invasive procedure. Those with female partners donor sperm may be required, the embryo can then be transferred to the partners uterus. Individuals with male partners can use partner's sperm but will need a surrogate to carry the embryo. Ovarian tissue cryopreservation Can be carried out at the same time as sex reassignment surgery. Surgical extraction of ovarian tissue for cryopreservation. Can be carried out before and after puberty. No sperm necessary at time of retrieval. Clinically available. Don’t need to halt GAHT. Cryopreservation of either an ovarian cortex biopsy or the whole ovary, then the thawing and maturation of the follicles at a later date. Reimplantation of the tissue and the use of IVF. Adverse effects Compared with the general population, people with cancer have a higher risk of arterial thrombotic events such as stroke, myocardial infarction and peripheral arterial embolism.
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Original:  Various methods of fertility preservation are detailed in the table below .
Revised:  Various methods of fertility preservation are detailed in the table above .
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Original:   Some female patients choose to have mature eggs extracted and fertilized outside of the body with sperm from a partner or donor.
Revised: Oocyte cryopreservation Oocyte cryopreservation involves the extraction and freezing of a female's eggs, to preserve their viability for future use. This is often due to medical reasons such as females undergoing cancer treatment. It is also increasingly being used for elective fertility preservation in females who are not ready to become pregnant but who are conscious of their age-related decline in fertility. This process is different to embryo cryopreservation, where mature eggs are fertilised in vitro (outside the body) with sperm from a donor or partner, and the embryo is frozen. The religious and ethical concerns and legislative restrictions surrounding embryo cryopreservation has prompted significant technical advances in oocyte cryopreservation techniques. Oocyte cryopreservation is now considered a well-established technique for fertility preservation in women. Some female patients choose to have mature eggs extracted and fertilized outside of the body with sperm from a partner or donor.
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Original:  Fertility  in Transgender Men Transgender men should be given the opportunity to have counselling on preserving their fertility before undergoing any type of medical transition, otherwise they may be unable to have biological children in the future.
Revised:  Fertility Preservation in Transgender Men Transgender men should be given the opportunity to have counselling on preserving their fertility before undergoing any type of medical transition, otherwise they may be unable to have biological children in the future.
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Original: Further reading American Society for Reproductive Medicine: Clarisa Gracia, Teresa K Woodruff: Oncofertility Medical Practice: Clinical Issues and Implementation.
Revised: Further reading Clarisa Gracia, Teresa K Woodruff: Oncofertility Medical Practice: Clinical Issues and Implementation.
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Original: thumbnail| He Zhuguo ( 1897-1985) He Zhuguo ( ;
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Original: thumbnail| He Zhuguo ( 1897-1985) He Zhuguo ( ;
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Original:  After Feng Jun won the Second Zhili-Fengtian War, Zhang Zuolin organized the Xuanfu Army south to expand the territory.
Revised:  After Feng Jun won the Second Zhili-Fengtian War, Zhang Zuolin led the Xuanfu Army south to expand the territory.
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Original:  After Feng Jun won the Second Zhili-Fengtian War, Zhang Zuolin organized the Xuanfu Army south to expand the territory.
Revised:  After Feng Jun won the Second Zhili-Fengtian War, Zhang Zuolin organized the Xuanfu Army south to expand territory.
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Original:  Before his departure, he went to Beijing to visit Jiang Dengxuan and Han Linchun, the old commanders and deputy commanders of the Xuanfu Xuanfu Armywho had been appointed to the south.
Revised:  Before his departure, he went to Beijing to visit Jiang Dengxuan and Han Linchun, the commander and deputy commander of the Xuanfu Xuanfu Armywho had been appointed to the south.
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Original:  But less than half a year, the transportation line of Feng Jun heading south was intercepted by Sun Chuanfang and Chen Diaoyuan , and Feng Jun was forced to withdraw to the northeast.
Revised:  But less than half a year, the transportation line of Feng Jun heading south was intercepted by Sun Chuanfang and Chen Tiaoyuan , and Feng Jun was forced to withdraw to the northeast.
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Original:  Because of the merits of the battle, He Zhuguo won the gold medal of bravery and was appointed head of the 45th regiment.
Revised:  Because of the merits of the battle, He Zhuguo won the gold medal of bravery and appointed head of the 45th regiment.
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Original:  In 1927, He Zhuguo entered Henan with Zhang Xueliang's regiment to fight against the  former deputy commander of the Wu Peifu army , Jin Yun'e.
Revised:  In 1927, He Zhuguo entered Henan with Zhang Xueliang's regiment to fight against the former deputy commander , Jin Yun'e.
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Original:  He Zhuguo conquered Zhongmu, Zhengzhou, Kaifeng, Luoyang and other places successively, and then acted as the brigade commander of the 45th Brigade.
Revised:  He Zhuguo conquered Zhongmu, Zhengzhou, Kaifeng, Luoyang and other places successively, and then acted as the commander of the 45th Brigade.
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Original:  In April of the same year, he was promoted to the commander of the 37th Brigade Major General Brigade and Kaifeng Police.
Revised:  In April of the same year, he was promoted to the commander of the 37th Brigade Major General and Kaifeng Police.
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Original:  In June of the same year, the 37th Brigade led by the institute was renamed the Provisional 23rd Division.
Revised:  In June of the same year, the 37th Brigade renamed the Provisional 23rd Division.
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Original:  He Zhuguo was appointed by Zhang Zuolin's Beijing government as the division chief.
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Original:  In Japan, when He Zhuguo held talks with the Japanese Chief of Staff, the Secretary of the Army, and officials of the Ministry of Foreign Affairs, the Japanese side made a territorial claim to Northeast China, and He Zhuguo was rejected on the spot.
Revised:  In Japan, when He Zhuguo held talks with the Japanese Chief of Staff, the Secretary of the Army, and officials of the Ministry of Foreign Affairs, the Japanese side made a territorial claim to Northeast China, demands He Zhuguo rejected on the spot.
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Original:  After returning home, He Zhuguo reported to Zhang Xueliang, Zhang Xueliang said: "In my Zhang Xueliang's hands, I can't give a single cent to Japan!"
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Original:  Zhang Xueliang issued a persuasion, calling for "peaceful peace" , and sent the Northeast Army to Shanhaiguan for armed mediation.
Revised:  Zhang Xueliang called for peace , and sent the Northeast Army to Shanhaiguan for armed mediation.
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Original:  He Zhuguo led the Northeast Infantry to independent 9th Brigade in Shanhaiguan . After the September 18th Incident in 1931, Zhang Xueliang, who presided over the Beiping Branch of the National Government Military Commission,  ordered He Zhuguo to be stationed in Shanhaiguan.
Revised:  He Zhuguo led the Northeast Army 9th Brigade in Shanhaiguan . After the September 18th Incident in 1931, Zhang Xueliang, who presided over the Beiping Branch of the National Government Military Commission, ordered He Zhuguo to be stationed in Shanhaiguan.
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Original:  He Zhuguo led the Northeast Infantry to independent 9th Brigade in Shanhaiguan . After the September 18th Incident in 1931, Zhang Xueliang, who presided over the Beiping Branch of the National Government Military Commission,  ordered He Zhuguo to be stationed in Shanhaiguan.
Revised:  He Zhuguo led the Northeast Infantry to independent 9th Brigade in Shanhaiguan . After the September 18th Incident in 1931, Zhang Xueliang, who presided over the Beiping Branch of the National Government Military Commission, again ordered He Zhuguo to be stationed in Shanhaiguan.
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Original:  He Zhuguo led the Northeast Infantry to independent 9th Brigade in Shanhaiguan . After the September 18th Incident in 1931, Zhang Xueliang, who presided over the Beiping Branch of the National Government Military Commission,  ordered He Zhuguo to be stationed in Shanhaiguan.
Revised:  He Zhuguo led the Northeast Infantry to independent 9th Brigade in Shanhaiguan . After the September 18th Incident in 1931, Zhang Xueliang, who presided over the Beiping Branch of the National Government Military Commission, ordered He Zhuguo to station in Shanhaiguan.
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Original:  At the end of November 1932, Masjiro Ochiai asked He Zhuguo to create a buffer zone including Luandong and Rehe, to implement "independent autonomy", and promised Japan to supply all its military pay and armaments .
Revised:  At the end of November 1932, Masjiro Ochiai asked He Zhuguo to create an independent buffer zone in Luandong and Rehe, to implement "independent autonomy", and promised Japan to supply all its military pay and armaments .
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Original:  At the end of November 1932, Masjiro Ochiai asked He Zhuguo to create a buffer zone including Luandong and Rehe, to implement "independent autonomy", and promised Japan to supply all its military pay and armaments .
Revised:  At the end of November 1932, Masjiro Ochiai asked He Zhuguo to create a buffer zone including Luandong and Rehe, promising to supply all govermnental and military expenses .
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Original:  When He Zhuguo came forward to negotiate, Japan asked He Zhuguo to admit that the bombardment was a misunderstanding, and asked He Zhuguo to ban the anti-Japanese and anti-Japanese behavior , and again proposed the creation of a "buffer zone", saying that if Zhu Guoguo agreed to establish a buffer zone, Japan would give He Zhuguo cash And military pay, ordnance.
Revised:  When He Zhuguo came forward to negotiate, Japan asked He Zhuguo to admit that the bombardment was a misunderstanding, asked He Zhuguo to ban the anti-Japanese and anti-Japanese behavior , and again proposed the creation of a "buffer zone", saying that if Zhu Guoguo agreed to establish a buffer zone, Japan would give He Zhuguo cash And military pay, ordnance.
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Original:  When He Zhuguo came forward to negotiate, Japan asked He Zhuguo to admit that the bombardment was a misunderstanding, and asked He Zhuguo to ban the anti-Japanese and anti-Japanese behavior , and again proposed the creation of a "buffer zone", saying that if Zhu Guoguo agreed to establish a buffer zone, Japan would give He Zhuguo cash And military pay, ordnance.
Revised:  When He Zhuguo came forward to negotiate, Japan asked He Zhuguo to admit that the bombardment was a misunderstanding, and asked He Zhuguo to stop anti-Japanese and anti-Japanese behavior , and again proposed the creation of a "buffer zone", saying that if Zhu Guoguo agreed to establish a buffer zone, Japan would give He Zhuguo cash And military pay, ordnance.
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Original:  When He Zhuguo came forward to negotiate, Japan asked He Zhuguo to admit that the bombardment was a misunderstanding, and asked He Zhuguo to ban the anti-Japanese and anti-Japanese behavior , and again proposed the creation of a "buffer zone", saying that if Zhu Guoguo agreed to establish a buffer zone, Japan would give He Zhuguo cash And military pay, ordnance.
Revised:  When He Zhuguo came forward to negotiate, Japan asked He Zhuguo to admit that the bombardment was a misunderstanding, and asked He Zhuguo to ban the anti-Japanese actions , and again proposed the creation of a "buffer zone", saying that if Zhu Guoguo agreed to establish a buffer zone, Japan would give He Zhuguo cash And military pay, ordnance.
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Original:  If He Zhuoguo does not agree , Japan will send troops to occupy the mouths of the Great Wall , and even enterprising Beiping and Tianjin.
Revised:  If He Zhuoguo does not agree , Japan will send troops to occupy the mouths of the Great Wall , and even Beiping and Tianjin.
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Original:  He Zhuoguo hurried to Peiping to report to Zhang Xueliang . Zhang Xueliang immediately held a secret military meeting to conduct a comprehensive military deployment and decided to dispatch troops to reinforce He Zhuguo 's Ministry .
Revised:  Zhang Xueliang immediately dispatched troops to reinforce He Zhuguo 's Ministry .
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Original:  He Zhuoguo hurried to Peiping to report to Zhang Xueliang . Zhang Xueliang immediately held a secret military meeting to conduct a comprehensive military deployment and decided to dispatch troops to reinforce He Zhuguo 's Ministry .
Revised:  He Zhuoguo hurried to Peiping to report to Zhang Xueliang . Zhang Xueliang immediately held a secret military meeting to conduct a comprehensive military deployment and decided to dispatch troops to reinforce He Zhuguo .
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Original:  Because of the heavy casualties, all four gates of Shanhaiguan have been hit hard, and He Zhuoguo was forced to lead the ministry to retreat.
Revised:  Due of the heavy casualties, all four gates of Shanhaiguan have been hit hard, and He Zhuoguo was forced to lead the ministry to retreat.
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Original:  Because of the heavy casualties, all four gates of Shanhaiguan have been hit hard, and He Zhuoguo was forced to lead the ministry to retreat.
Revised:  Because of the heavy casualties, He Zhuoguo was forced to lead the ministry to retreat.
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Original:  Because of the heavy casualties, all four gates of Shanhaiguan have been hit hard, and He Zhuoguo was forced to lead the ministry to retreat.
Revised:  Because of the heavy casualties, all four gates of Shanhaiguan have been hit hard, and He Zhuoguo was forced to retreat.
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Original:  After Shanhaiguan lost, He Zhuguo was ordered to defend Beiping and Tianjin.
Revised:  After the treat from Shanhaiguan He Zhuguo was ordered to defend Beiping and Tianjin.
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Original:  He Zhuguo served as the commander And 109 division teacher.
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Original:  In January 1934, Zhang Xueliang was recalled to China by Chiang Kai-shek and served as deputy commander-in-chief of the Yu-E-Wan Bandit Headquarters.
Revised:  In January 1934, Zhang Xueliang was recalled by Chiang Kai-shek and served as deputy commander-in-chief of the Yu-E-Wan Bandit Headquarters.
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Original:  He Zhuguo's 57th Army was transferred to Xiaogan, Songbu, Huang'an, Macheng, and West Anhui in eastern Hubei, and surrounded the Eastern Red Sea of the 25th Army of Dabie Mountain in Xuhai.
Revised:  He Zhuguo's 57th Army was transferred to Xiaogan, Songbu, Huang'an, Macheng, and West Anhui in eastern Hubei, and surrounded the 25th Army of Dabie Mountain in Xuhai.
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Original:  He Zhuguo's 57th Army was transferred to Xiaogan, Songbu, Huang'an, Macheng, and West Anhui in eastern Hubei, and surrounded the Eastern Red Sea of the 25th Army of Dabie Mountain in Xuhai.
Revised:  He Zhuguo's 57th Army was transferred to Xiaogan, Songbu, Huang'an, Macheng, and West Anhui in eastern Hubei, and surrounded the Eastern Red Sea of the 25th Army at Dabie Mountain in Xuhai.
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