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Original:  This incident is the largest officially recognised loss of life among Russian personnel since they began operations in Syria last September.
Revised:  This is the largest officially recognised loss of life among Russian personnel since they began operations in Syria last September.
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Original:  This incident is the largest officially recognised loss of life among Russian personnel since they began operations in Syria last September.
Revised:  This incident is the largest loss of Russian personnel Russia has officially recognized in their Syrian operations since those operations began last September.
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Original:  Russian President has presented it as a success against Islamist terrorism
Revised:  According to Russian President the target of the Russian campaign is terrorism
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Original: acknowledged one of their military helicopters was shot down today over earlier today , killing the entire complement of five people aboard.
Revised: acknowledged one of their military helicopters was shot down today over , killing the entire complement of five people aboard.
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Original:  According to Russian president , the target of the Russian campaign is terrorism
Revised:  According to Russian President , the target of the Russian campaign is terrorism
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Original:  Other recent firsts include a chamber opera that debuted in 2014, participating in the Fiction Festival in 2015, and being the first writer included in the , her Scribbler Moon not to be read until 2115.
Revised:  Other recent firsts include a chamber opera that debuted in 2014, participating in the Fiction Festival in 2015, and being the first writer included in the , her Scribbler Moon not to be read until 2114.
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Original:  The panel includes a question and answer session and an opportunity to purchase the book before its September 6 release date.
Revised:  The panel includes a question and answer session and an opportunity to purchase the book before its general release date.
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Original:  Announced in December of last year, it's the first such work from the 76-year-old -winning Atwood .
Revised:  Other recent firsts from the 76-year-old -winning Atwood .
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Original:  As first announced in February, the , , and creator is to make his final Canadian convention appearance at Fan Expo , just a few months before his final appearance at any convention, this October in . Also bidding adieu to the convention circuit are and , from the original television series, celebrating its 50th anniversary this year.
Revised:  As first announced in February, the , , and creator is to make his final Canadian convention appearance at Fan Expo . Also bidding adieu to the convention circuit are and , from the original television series, celebrating its 50th anniversary this year.
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Original:  He played only seven games before leaving for Juventus the next year.
Revised:  He played only seven games before leaving for Juventus next year.
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Original:  Spending four years with the Old Lady , Pogba has won four Serie A titles, three Italian Super Cups, and two trophies as well.
Revised:  Spending four years with the Old Lady Pogba has won four Serie A titles, three Italian Super Cups, and two trophies as well.
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Original:   Mourinho praised Pogba and said Pogba "will be a key part of the United team".
Revised:  Manchester United's manager Mourinho praised Pogba and said Pogba "will be a key part of the United team".
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Original:  He played only seven games before leaving for Juventus  next year.
Revised:  He played only seven games before leaving for Juventus the next year.
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Original:  Spending four years with the Old Lady  Pogba has won four Serie A titles, three Italian Super Cups, and two trophies as well.
Revised:  Spending four years with the Old Lady , Pogba has won four Serie A titles, three Italian Super Cups, and two trophies as well.
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Original:  Manchester United's manager Mourinho praised Pogba and said Pogba "will be a key part of the United team".
Revised:  Mourinho praised Pogba and said Pogba "will be a key part of the United team".
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Original: Today , English football club Manchester United F.C. announced signing Frenchman from Italian club Juventus F.C. Pogba rejoined The Red Devils on a five-year contract for €105 million making him the most expensive footballer of all time breaking the previous fee record of 's transfer from to Spanish capital club Real Madrid.
Revised: Yesterday , English football club Manchester United F.C. announced signing Frenchman from Italian club Juventus F.C. Pogba rejoined The Red Devils on a five-year contract for €105 million making him the most expensive footballer of all time breaking the previous fee record of 's transfer from to Spanish capital club Real Madrid.
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Original:  It has always been a club with a special place in my heart and I am looking forward to working with  José Mourinho."
Revised:  It has always been a club with a special place in my heart and I am looking forward to working with United manager José Mourinho."
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Original: Yesterday, English football club Manchester United F.C. announced signing Frenchman from Italian club Juventus F.C. Pogba rejoined The Red Devils on a five-year contract for €105 million making him the most expensive footballer of all time  breaking the previous fee record of 's transfer from to Spanish capital club Real Madrid.
Revised: Yesterday, English football club Manchester United F.C. announced signing Frenchman from Italian club Juventus F.C. Pogba rejoined The Red Devils on a five-year contract for €105 million making him the most expensive footballer of all time by breaking the previous fee record of 's transfer from to Spanish capital club Real Madrid.
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Original:  This year, Pogba was announced in the FIFA FIFPro Team of the Year as well as the UEFA Team of the Year .
Revised:  This year, Pogba was named in the as well as the UEFA Team of the Year .
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Original:  This year, Pogba was announced in the FIFA FIFPro Team of the Year as well as the UEFA Team of the Year .
Revised:  This year, Pogba was announced in the FIFA FIFPro Team of the Year as well as the .
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Original:  Previously, Manchester United signed Zlatan Ibrahimović, , and . euro 2016.
Revised:  Previously, Manchester United signed Zlatan Ibrahimović, , and . 
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Original:  He was known for playing in many of the films, as well as his role as Fidget in 's
Revised:  He was known for playing in many of the films, as well as his role as Fidgit in 's
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Original:  File photo of Lukas Podolsk Debuting internationally in 2004, Podolski has won 129 international caps , Germany's third all time most capped player after and . 31-year-old Lukas Podolski is the third top-scorer for Germany, netting 48 goals.
Revised:  File photo of Lukas Podolsk Debuting internationally in 2004, Podolski has won 129 international , Germany's third all time most capped player after and . 31-year-old Lukas Podolski is the third top-scorer for Germany, netting 48 goals.
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Original: Four years ago, number 10 Podolski became the youngest player to make 100 international appearances for Germany aged of 27 years and 13 days.
Revised: Four years ago, Podolski became the youngest player to make 100 international appearances for Germany aged of 27 years and 13 days.
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Original: Four years ago, Podolski became the youngest player to make 100 international appearances for Germany aged of 27 years and 13 days.
Revised: Four years ago, Podolski became the youngest player to make 100 international appearances for Germany aged 27 years and 13 days.
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Original: Four years ago, Podolski became the youngest player to make 100 international appearances for Germany aged of 27 years and 13 days.
Revised: Four years ago, Podolski became the youngest player to make 100 international appearances for Germany aged of 27 years 13 days.
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Original:  On social media, Podolski said, "I feel like my focus has shifted , My time is over [...] I arrived in Germany as a two-year-old boy with basically only a football under my arm and am now a world champion.
Revised:  Podolski said, "I feel like my focus has shifted , My time is over [...] I arrived in Germany as a two-year-old boy with basically only a football under my arm and am now a world champion.
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Original:  On social media, Podolski said, "I feel like my focus has shifted , My time is over [...] I arrived in Germany as a two-year-old boy with basically only a football under my arm and am now a world champion.
Revised:  On social media, Podolski said, "I feel like my focus has shifted ... My time is over [...] I arrived in Germany as a two-year-old boy with basically only a football under my arm and am now a world champion.
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Original: A spokesperson for INDECLINE told the project was inspired by the story "" which depicts a vain and over confident leader.
Revised: A spokesperson for INDECLINE told the project was inspired by the story "" which depicts a vain and overconfident leader.
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Original:  Titled "The Emperor Has No Balls", the project was devised by the anarchist collective INDECLINE as an attempt to present Trump in the most unflattering and humiliating way possible .
Revised:  Titled "The Emperor Has No Balls", the project was devised by the anarchist collective INDECLINE , presenting present Trump in the most unflattering and humiliating way possible .
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Original:  Titled "The Emperor Has No Balls", the project was devised by the anarchist collective INDECLINE as an attempt to present Trump in the most unflattering and humiliating way possible .
Revised:  Titled "The Emperor Has No Balls", the project was devised by the anarchist collective INDECLINE as an attempt to present Trump in an unflattering and humiliating way possible .
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Original:  Titled "The Emperor Has No Balls", the project was devised by the anarchist collective INDECLINE as an attempt to present Trump in the most unflattering and humiliating way possible .
Revised:  Titled "The Emperor Has No Balls", the project was devised by the anarchist collective INDECLINE as an attempt to present Trump in the most unflattering and humiliating way .
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Original: The statues were created by a -based artist called Ginger, who  was approached by INDECLINE because of his pervious work designing monsters for horror movies and haunted houses.
Revised: The statues are credited to a -based artist called Ginger, who was approached by INDECLINE because of his pervious work designing monsters for horror movies and haunted houses.
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Original: The statues were created by a -based artist called Ginger, who  was approached by INDECLINE because of his pervious work designing monsters for horror movies and haunted houses.
Revised: The statues were created by a -based artist called Ginger, who said he was approached by INDECLINE because of his pervious work designing monsters for horror movies and haunted houses.
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Original:  Titled "The Emperor Has No Balls", the project was devised by the anarchist collective INDECLINE, presenting present Trump in a humiliating way.
Revised:  Titled "The Emperor Has No Balls", the project was devised by the anarchist collective INDECLINE, presenting present Trump in an unflattering and humiliating way.
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Original:  A spokeswoman for the NYC parks and recreation centre stated: "NYC Parks stands firmly against any unpermitted erection in city parks, no matter how small.   
Revised:  A spokeswoman for the NYC parks and recreation centre stated: "NYC Parks stands firmly against any unpermitted erection in city parks, no matter how small. " 
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Original:  " In other news, a dog drowned in a lake.
Revised:  In other news, a dog drowned in a lake.
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Original: Justice Lawrence Collins of the British High Court has overturned the Blair Government's refusal of citizenship to Hicks, whose mother was born in England.
Revised: Justice Lawrence Collins of the British High Court has overturned the British Government's refusal of citizenship to Hicks, whose mother was born in England.
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Original:  This would make Mr Hicks the primary responsibility of the Blair Government, which could not then strip him of his British citizenship as it would leave him stateless.
Revised:  This would make Mr Hicks the primary responsibility of the British Government, which could not then strip him of his British citizenship as it would leave him stateless.
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Original:  He said there was now no reason why Hicks should not enjoy the same protection as the nine other British citizens released without charge from Guantanamo Bay on representations of the Blair Government.
Revised:  He said there was now no reason why Hicks should not enjoy the same protection as the nine other British citizens released without charge from Guantanamo Bay on representations of the British Government.
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Original:  | Credit: Alexandre Buisse A lightning strike in Southern Norway’s region has killed more than 300 , according to reports from local authorities.
Revised:  Credit: Alexandre Buisse A lightning strike in Southern Norway’s region has killed more than 300 , according to reports from local authorities.
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Original:  Credit: Alexandre Buisse A lightning strike in Southern Norway’s region has killed more than 300 , according to reports from local authorities.
Revised:  A lightning strike in Southern Norway’s region has killed more than 300 , according to reports from local authorities.
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Original: File :20070818-0001-strolling reindeer.jpg|File photo of a reindeer.
Revised: File photo of a reindeer.
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Original:  Barcelona forward was loaned to Valencia with an option to buy the player for €12 million , having a buy-back clause in the agreement .
Revised:  Barcelona forward was loaned to Valencia with an option to buy the player for €12 million .
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Original:  After passing hood medicals and signing a five-year contract, Alcácer said, 
Revised:  After passing hood medicals and signing a five-year contract, Alcácer said, .
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Original:  Valencia said that Munir's signing was  "important reinforcement for the frontline" of their team.
Revised:  Valencia said Munir's signing was "important reinforcement for the frontline" of their team.
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Original:  Valencia said that Munir's signing was  "important reinforcement for the frontline" of their team.
Revised:  Valencia said that Munir's signing was an "important reinforcement for the frontline" of their team.
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Original:  Valencia said Munir's signing was an "  important reinforcement for the frontline" of their team.
Revised:  Valencia said Munir's signing was " important reinforcement for the frontline" of their team.
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Original:  Valencia said Munir's signing was an "  important reinforcement for the frontline" of their team.
Revised:  Valencia said Munir's signing was an " an important reinforcement for the frontline" of their team.
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Original: Munir had graduated from Barça 's youth academy and made his professional debut playing a La Liga match at the age of eighteen.
Revised: Munir graduated from Barça 's youth academy and made his professional debut playing a La Liga match at the age of eighteen.
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Original: Munir has been allocated  number 9 jersey at Valencia.
Revised: Munir has been allocated the number 9 jersey at Valencia.
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Original:  Barcelona has set  buy-out clause of Paco Alcácer  €100 million who is the sixth signing of this season.
Revised:  Barcelona has set the buy-out clause of Paco Alcácer €100 million who is the sixth signing of this season.
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Original:  Barcelona has set  buy-out clause of Paco Alcácer  €100 million who is the sixth signing of this season.
Revised:  Barcelona has set buy-out clause of Paco Alcácer at €100 million who is the sixth signing of this season.
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Original:  Barcelona has set  buy-out clause of Paco Alcácer  €100 million who is the sixth signing of this season.
Revised:  Barcelona has set buy-out clause of Paco Alcácer €100 million ; he is 's sixth signing this season.
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Original:  Previously, Barcelona signed Dutch goalkeeper from Amsterdam based club
Revised:  Previously, Barcelona signed Dutch goalkeeper from Amsterdam-based club
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Original:  Previously, Barcelona signed Dutch goalkeeper from Amsterdam-based club  
Revised:  Previously, Barcelona signed Dutch goalkeeper from Amsterdam-based club . 
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Original:  One decade at the , Hart has won two trophies, two s and one .
Revised:  In a decade at the , Hart has won two trophies, two s and one .
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Original: On Wednesday, English football club Manchester City F.C. announced that they had loaned their goalkeeper to Italian club till the season end.
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Original:  In a decade at the , Hart has won two trophies, two s and one . Hart debuted for England at the age of 21, and has represented the country at and 2016 and . ]  Signing the contract, Hart said, Goalkeeper Joe Hart's move away from Manchester City came about a week after Pep Guardiola signed Chilean goalkeeper from FC Barcelona.
Revised:  In a decade at the , Hart has won two trophies, two s and one . Contents ] Signing the contract, Hart said, Goalkeeper Joe Hart's move away from Manchester City came about a week after Pep Guardiola signed Chilean goalkeeper from FC Barcelona.
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Original:  In a decade at the , Hart has won two trophies, two s and one . Hart debuted for England at the age of 21, and has represented the country at and 2016 and . ]  Signing the contract, Hart said, Goalkeeper Joe Hart's move away from Manchester City came about a week after Pep Guardiola signed Chilean goalkeeper from FC Barcelona.
Revised:  In a decade at the , Hart has won two trophies, two s and one . Hart debuted for England at the age of 21, and has represented the country at and 2016 and . show] Signing the contract, Hart said, Goalkeeper Joe Hart's move away from Manchester City came about a week after Pep Guardiola signed Chilean goalkeeper from FC Barcelona.
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Original:  Kalvin Ho Kai-ming asked voters to choose a candidate whose " stance and ideology are similar" to his own party's.
Revised:  Kalvin Ho Kai-ming asked voters to choose a candidate with similar stance and ideology are similar" to his own party's.
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Original:  Kalvin Ho Kai-ming asked voters to choose a candidate whose " stance and ideology are similar" to his own party's.
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Original:  Zimmerman recommended supporters to vote for 's instead, while Andy Chui in a post asked voters to vote for a candidate who "supports democracy and human development." Suzanne Wu did not recommend a particular candidate, but instead said she would support other Labour Party candidates on election day.
Revised:  Zimmerman recommended supporters vote for 's instead, while Andy Chui in a post asked voters to vote for a candidate who "supports democracy and human development." Suzanne Wu did not recommend a particular candidate, but instead said she would support other Labour Party candidates on election day.
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Original:  While neither of them recommended a specific candidate upon suspending their campaign, both of them suggested their supporters vote for pan-democratic candidates with a higher likelihood of winning, to continue the pan-democrats' majority in the "Super District Council" seats.
Revised:  Both of them suggested their supporters vote for pan-democratic candidates with a higher likelihood of winning, to continue the pan-democrats' majority in the "Super District Council" seats.
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Original:  Zimmerman recommended supporters vote for 's instead , while Andy Chui in a post asked voters to vote for a candidate who "supports democracy and human development." Suzanne Wu did not recommend a particular candidate, but instead said she would support other Labour Party candidates on election day .
Revised:  Zimmerman recommended supporters vote for 's instead .
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Original:  Ho and Chan of the District Council (Second) functional constituency were polled under 10\% throughout the polls, Chui and Zimmerman in the HK Island constituency at or under 5\%, Wu of Kowloon East also at or under 5\%, and Cheung was polled under 1\%.
Revised:  Ho and Chan of the District Council (Second) functional constituency were polled under 10\% in the polls, Chui and Zimmerman in the HK Island constituency at or under 5\%, Wu of Kowloon East also at or under 5\%, and Cheung was polled under 1\%.
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Original:  Ho and Chan of the District Council (Second) functional constituency were polled under 10\% in the polls , Chui and Zimmerman in the HK Island constituency at or under 5\%, Wu of Kowloon East also at or under 5\%, and Cheung was polled under 1\%.
Revised:  Ho and Chan of the District Council (Second) functional constituency were polled under 10\% , Chui and Zimmerman in the HK Island constituency at or under 5\%, Wu of Kowloon East also at or under 5\%, and Cheung was polled under 1\%.
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Original:  The 2016 Hong Kong legislative election , the sixth since the former colony's to , is to be held on Sunday.
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Original:  the right of its employees to vote, while no response was immediately forthcoming from China Resources Land. x100px|pro-Beijing figure Lau Nai-keung Meanwhile, after claiming Hong Kong's and the Chinese central government's encouraged Hong Kong independence for the past few days, reported on Saturday the new party has ties with figure . Youngspiration responded by stating its members do not know Lau Nai-keung personally or the pro-Beijing organisation "Hong Kong Community Network"
Revised:  the right of its employees to vote, while no response was immediately forthcoming from China Resources Land. x100px|pro-Beijing figure Lau Nai-keung Meanwhile, after claiming Hong Kong's and the Chinese central government's encouraged Hong Kong independence for the past few days, reported the new party has ties with figure . Youngspiration responded by stating its members do not know Lau Nai-keung personally or the pro-Beijing organisation "Hong Kong Community Network"
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Original:  mentioned in Sing Pao's article, and asked the newspaper to "present its evidence" regarding the group's alleged ties to Beijing, saying accusing them without evidence "violates media ethics."
Revised:  mentioned in Sing Pao's article, and challenged the newspaper to "present its evidence" regarding the group's alleged ties to Beijing, saying accusing them without evidence "violates media ethics."
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Original:  "Justice Alliance " party candidate Leticia Lee In the geographical constituency, candidate said he received confirmation from the (ICAC) that they were investigating pro-establishment "Justice Alliance " party candidate for bribery.
Revised:  Justice Alliance Party candidate Leticia Lee In the geographical constituency, candidate said he received confirmation from the (ICAC) that they were investigating pro-establishment "Justice Alliance " party candidate for bribery.
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