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Original:  New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will attend Waitangi day commemorations on Feburary 6th  however she will not visit the lower Te Tii Marae, which has been a focus for protest in recent years.
Revised:  New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will be attending Waitangi day commemorations on Feburary 6th however she will not visit the lower Te Tii Marae, which has been a focus for protest in recent years.
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Original:  New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will attend Waitangi day commemorations on Feburary 6th  however she will not visit the lower Te Tii Marae, which has been a focus for protest in recent years.
Revised:  New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will attend Waitangi day commemorations on Feburary 6th ; however she will not visit the lower Te Tii Marae, which has been a focus for protest in recent years.
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Original:  New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will attend Waitangi day commemorations on Feburary 6th  however she will not visit the lower Te Tii Marae, which has been a focus for protest in recent years.
Revised:  New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will attend Waitangi day commemorations on Feburary 6th however she will not visit the lower Te Tii Marae, which has been a focal point for protest in recent years.
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Original:  The Leader of the Opposition (New Zealand) Dr . Don Brash is also to attend the attend a reception hosted by the Governor General and the Dawn Service the next morning.
Revised:  The Leader of the Opposition Dr Don Brash is also to attend the attend a reception hosted by the Governor General and the Dawn Service the next morning.
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Original:  The New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will be attending Waitangi Day commemorations on Feburary 6th;
Revised: Helen Clark; Prime Minister The New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will be attending Waitangi Day commemorations on Feburary 6th;
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Original:  In 2004 Brash was was showered with mud at the entrance of the lower Te Tii Marae.
Revised:  In 2004 Brash was showered with mud at the entrance of the lower Te Tii Marae.
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Original:  Prime Minister The New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will be attending Waitangi Day commemorations on Feburary 6th;
Revised:  Prime Minister The New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark will be attending Waitangi Day commemorations on February 6th;
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Original:  Dr. Don Brash Although this is New Zealand's national day, the commemoration has often been the focus of protest by Maori activists, and is often marred by controversy.
Revised:  Although this is New Zealand's national day, the commemoration has often been the focus of protest by Maori activists, and is often marred by controversy.
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Original:  This practice, whilst far from unique to Vodafone within the telecommunications industry, contrasts poorly with the common practice for most ISPs (Internet Service Providers), who conventionally provide a "system status" page on their websit
Revised:  This practice, whilst far from unique to Vodafone within the telecommunications industry, contrasts poorly with the common practice for most ISPs (Internet Service Providers), who conventionally provide a "system status" page on their website
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Original:  The Dow Jone Industrial Average and S&P 500 Index ended the day with losses of 0.38 percent and 0.39 percent to end at 10,854.86 and 1277.93 respectively.
Revised:  The Dow Jones Industrial Average and S&P 500 Index ended the day with losses of 0.38 percent and 0.39 percent to end at 10,854.86 and 1277.93 respectively.
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Original:  Analysts blame disappointing sales forecasts for the first quarter for today's selloff   
Revised:  Analysts blamed disappointing sales forecasts for the first quarter for today's selloff 
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Original:  Analysts blame disappointing sales forecasts for the first quarter for today's selloff   
Revised:  Analysts blame disappointing sales forecasts for the first quarter for today's selloff . 
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Original: Thomas Thornhill lowered his stock rating to "neutral" and commented on Intel's competitive situation with arch rival Advanced Micro Devices.
Revised: Thomas Thornhill lowered his stock rating to "neutral" and commented on Intel's competitive situation with arch-rival Advanced Micro Devices.
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Original:  The reading had been expected to fall to $ 54 billion, following a softening in oil prices. Refernce
Revised:  The reading had been expected to fall to $ 54 billion, following a softening in oil prices. Reference
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Original: The United States Government reported the largest trade deficit in its history today (see graph below) , totalling $60.3 billion for the month of November.
Revised: The United States Government reported the largest trade deficit in its history today , totalling $60.3 billion for the month of November.
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Original:  Categories :United States Categories :Economy and busine
Revised:  Category :United States Categories :Economy and busine
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Original:  Categories :United States Categories :Economy and busine
Revised:  Categories :United States Category :Economy and busine
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Original: 100px |Helen Clark , Prime Minister New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark did not  visit the lower Te Tii Marae , and did not attended the dawn service today, she hosted a breakfast for Northland civic leaders instead, and then she then took part in other events around the country.
Revised: 100px |Helen Clark , Prime Minister New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark did not visit the lower Te Tii Marae . She hosted a breakfast for Northland civic leaders instead, and then she then took part in other events around the country.
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Original: 100px |Helen Clark , Prime Minister New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark did not  visit the lower Te Tii Marae , and did not attended the dawn service today, she hosted a breakfast for Northland civic leaders instead, and then she then took part in other events around the country.
Revised: 100px |Helen Clark , Prime Minister New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark did not visit the lower Te Tii Marae , and did not attended the dawn service today, she hosted a breakfast for Northland civic leaders instead, and she then took part in other events around the country.
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Original:   The Government (Labour) has pledged finish all Treaty claims by 2020, while National's 2005 election policy had called for all claims to be settled by 2010.
Revised:  The Government (Labour) has pledged finish all Treaty claims by 2020, while National's 2005 election policy called for all claims to be settled by 2010.
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Original:  The Prime Minister is refusing to comment on the prayer   .
Revised:  The Prime Minister has refused to comment on the prayer .
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Original:  The Prime Minister is refusing to comment on the prayer   .
Revised:  The Prime Minister is refusing to comment on the prayer . .
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Original:  200px|Helen Clark being welcomed onto the Hoani Waititi Marae 100px|Helen Clark, Prime Minister The Leader of the Opposition Dr Don Brash visited the upper Te Tii Marae on Saturday afternoon.
Revised:  200px|Helen Clark being welcomed onto Hoani Waititi Marae 100px|Helen Clark, Prime Minister The Leader of the Opposition Dr Don Brash visited the upper Te Tii Marae on Saturday afternoon.
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Original:  The Government (Labour) has pledged  finish all Treaty claims by 2020, while National's 2005 election policy called for all claims to be settled by 2010.
Revised:  The Government (Labour) has pledged to finish all Treaty claims by 2020, while National's 2005 election policy called for all claims to be settled by 2010.
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Original:  100px|Her Excellency the Governor-General Governor General Dame Silvia Cartwright said in her annual Waitangi Day address.
Revised:  100px|Her Excellency the Governor-General Governor-General Dame Silvia Cartwright said in her annual Waitangi Day address.
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Original:  In his speech to the Marae Dr Brash said New Zealand needs to stop looking in the “rear-view mirror” and that the speedy settlement of claims is important for all New Zealanders.
Revised:  In his speech at the Marae Dr Brash said New Zealand needs to stop looking in the “rear-view mirror” and that the speedy settlement of claims is important for all New Zealanders.
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Original:  Dr Brash also visited Hoani Waititi Marae this afternoon, and left before the Prime Minister arrived.
Revised:  Dr Brash then visited Hoani Waititi Marae this afternoon, and left before the Prime Minister arrived.
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Original:  Chief of Navy, Rear Admiral David Ledson says "You can either build walls of silence or you can use words to build bridges...we'd sooner use words and conversation to build bridges than sit either side of a stone wall , " The annual hikoi (protest march) with about 500 people started at lunch time and marched from the lower Te Tii Marae, up to the upper Te Tii Marae and then to the contentious flag pole , where some protestors had a brief standoff with police.
Revised:  Chief of Navy, Rear Admiral David Ledson says "You can either build walls of silence or you can use words to build bridges...we'd sooner use words and conversation to build bridges than sit either side of a stone wall . " The annual hikoi (protest march) with about 500 people started at lunch time and marched from the lower Te Tii Marae, up to the upper Te Tii Marae and then to the contentious flag pole , where some protestors had a brief standoff with police.
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Original:  Chief of Navy, Rear Admiral David Ledson says "You can either build walls of silence or you can use words to build bridges...we'd sooner use words and conversation to build bridges than sit either side of a stone wall , " The annual hikoi (protest march) with about 500 people started at lunch time and marched from the lower Te Tii Marae, up to the upper Te Tii Marae and then to the contentious flag pole , where some protestors had a brief standoff with police.
Revised:  Chief of Navy, Rear Admiral David Ledson says "You can either build walls of silence or you can use words to build bridges...we'd sooner use words and conversation to build bridges than sit either side of a stone wall , " The annual hikoi (protest march) with about 500 people started at lunch time and marched from the lower Te Tii Marae, up to the upper Te Tii Marae and then to the contentious flagpole , where some protestors had a brief standoff with police.
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Original: [now] involving families, schools, youth and community groups...let us as always, remember our history, but let us look forward also to a bright future for our country  "
Revised: [now] involving families, schools, youth and community groups...let us as always, remember our history, but let us look forward also to a bright future for our country . "
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Original:  She hosted a breakfast for Northland civic leaders instead, and she then took part in other events around the country.
Revised:  She hosted a breakfast for Northland civic leaders instead, and then took part in other events around the country.
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Original:  This year  the morning celebrations at Waitangi were peaceful, and there was only a brief altercation during the afternoon there . Celebrations also went smoothly at over 60 other sites around the country, except for a confrontation at Hayman Park in Manukau City between local Maori and National Front members.
Revised:  This year , the morning celebrations at Waitangi were peaceful, and there was only a brief altercation during the afternoon there . Celebrations also went smoothly at over 60 other sites around the country, except for a confrontation at Hayman Park in Manukau City between local Maori and National Front members.
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Original:  This year  the morning celebrations at Waitangi were peaceful, and there was only a brief altercation during the afternoon there . Celebrations also went smoothly at over 60 other sites around the country, except for a confrontation at Hayman Park in Manukau City between local Maori and National Front members.
Revised:  This year the morning celebrations at Waitangi were peaceful, and there was only a brief altercation during the afternoon . Celebrations also went smoothly at over 60 other sites around the country, except for a confrontation at Hayman Park in Manukau City between local Maori and National Front members.
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Original:  She hosted a breakfast for Northland civic leaders instead, and then took part in other events around the country.
Revised:  She hosted a breakfast for Northland civic leaders before taking part in other events around the country.
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Original:  In his speech at the Marae  Dr Brash said New Zealand needs to stop looking in the “rear-view mirror” and that the speedy settlement of claims is important for all New Zealanders.
Revised:  In his speech at the Marae , Dr Brash said New Zealand needs to stop looking in the “rear-view mirror” and that the speedy settlement of claims is important for all New Zealanders.
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Original:  The Government (Labour ) has pledged to finish all Treaty claims by 2020, while National's 2005 election policy called for all claims to be settled by 2010.
Revised:  The current Labour government has pledged to finish all Treaty claims by 2020, while National's 2005 election policy called for all claims to be settled by 2010.
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Original:  Dr Brash also attended the dawn service at the upper Te Tii Marae this morning , where he was asked to offer a prayer;
Revised:  Dr Brash also attended the dawn service at the upper Te Tii Marae , where he was asked to offer a prayer;
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Original:  Dr Brash then visited Hoani Waititi Marae this afternoon, and left before the Prime Minister arrived.
Revised:  Dr Brash then visited Hoani Waititi Marae , leaving before the Prime Minister arrived.
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Original:  throwing flour in the House of Commons at the Prime Minister and hitting him and the trespassing incident at Buckingham Palace.
Revised:  throwing flour in the House of Commons at the Prime Minister and the trespassing incident at Buckingham Palace.
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Original: Protest F4J|200px|Fathers for Justice at a recent London protest Pressure group and fathers rights campaigners Fathers for Justice are to suspend there operations.
Revised:  Pressure group and fathers rights campaigners Fathers for Justice are to suspend there operations.
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Original: Pressure group and fathers rights campaigners Fathers for Justice are to suspend there operations.
Revised: Pressure group and fathers rights campaigners Fathers for Justice are to suspend their operations.
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Original:  These actions have stirred up public support for there campaign.
Revised:  These actions have stirred up public support for their campaign.
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Original:  Mr O'Connor has now publicly stated that he want to distance himself from the group  'I don't want to be associated with an organisation getting headlines like this'.
Revised:  Mr O'Connor has now publicly stated that he wants to distance himself from the group 'I don't want to be associated with an organisation getting headlines like this'.
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Original:  Mr O'Connor has now publicly stated that he want to distance himself from the group  'I don't want to be associated with an organisation getting headlines like this'.
Revised:  Mr O'Connor has now publicly stated that he want to distance himself from the group . 'I don't want to be associated with an organisation getting headlines like this'.
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Original:  Fathers for Justice had been working towards removing the radical elements of its membership with an explosion of 30 of its most extreme members.
Revised:  Fathers for Justice had been working towards removing the radical elements of its membership with an expulsion of 30 of its most extreme members.
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Original:  This event has left the group in turmoil , they now appear to have no leader and their future is uncertain 
Revised:  This event has left the group in turmoil ; they now appear to have no leader and their future is uncertain 
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Original:  This event has left the group in turmoil , they now appear to have no leader and their future is uncertain 
Revised:  This event has left the group in turmoil , they now appear to have no leader and their future is uncertain .
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Original:  The famous Golden Gate Bridge in the USA, which the bridge in Borneo aimed to replicate  National police representative Boy Rafly Amar said "It is believed that some victims are still in the river.
Revised:  The famous Golden Gate Bridge in the USA, which the bridge in Borneo aimed to replicate . National police representative Boy Rafly Amar said "It is believed that some victims are still in the river.
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Original: The president  has sent three ministers to the site to investigate the accident, while Bambang Widaryatmo, head of East Kalimantan's police, promised "parties found to be negligent will be prosecuted".
Revised: The president , , has sent three ministers to the site to investigate the accident, while Bambang Widaryatmo, head of East Kalimantan's police, promised "parties found to be negligent will be prosecuted".
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Original:  The developers, computer scientist David Anderson, director of the SETI@home project and physics graduate student  Joshua Von Korff  are expected to design the program which is expected to go public in March.
Revised:  The developers, computer scientist David Anderson, director of the SETI@home project and physics graduate student , Joshua Von Korff are expected to design the program which is expected to go public in March.
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Original:  The developers, computer scientist David Anderson, director of the SETI@home project and physics graduate student  Joshua Von Korff  are expected to design the program which is expected to go public in March.
Revised:  The developers, computer scientist David Anderson, director of the SETI@home project and physics graduate student Joshua Von Korff , are expected to design the program which is expected to go public in March.
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Original: Before they opened the collector, Brownlee admitted that no one really knew whether or not the device had actually cought any particles.
Revised: Before they opened the collector, Brownlee admitted that no one really knew whether or not the device had actually caught any particles.
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Original:  Bennet came under fire in late 2005 for controversial statements made following the landfall of Hurricane Katrina, in which he said on his radio program: "if you wanted to reduce crime, you could—if that were your sole purpose—you could abort every black baby in this country and your crime rate would go down."
Revised:  Bennett came under fire in late 2005 for controversial statements made following the landfall of Hurricane Katrina, in which he said on his radio program: "if you wanted to reduce crime, you could—if that were your sole purpose—you could abort every black baby in this country and your crime rate would go down."
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Original:  Bennett came under fire in late 2005 for controversial statements made following the landfall of Hurricane Katrina, in which he said on his radio program: "if you wanted to reduce crime, you could—if that were your sole purpose—you could abort every black baby in this country and your crime rate would go down."
Revised:  Bennet came under fire in late 2005 for controversial statements made following the landfall of Hurricane Katrina, in which he said on his radio program: "if you wanted to reduce crime, you could—if that were your sole purpose—you could abort every black baby in this country and your crime rate would go down."
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Original:  Bennett, also the author of the popular "Book of Virtues" series of children's stories, has also faced serious questions against his personal integrity over gambling and drinking problems.
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Original:  CNN has been in a fierce ratings competition with the FOX News Channel, which has steadily begun gaining market share against the network, featuring several of the most-watched primetime shows , including the venerable primetime block of "The O'Reilly Factor", "Hannity and Colmes", and "On the Record with Greta van Susteren", the most highly-rated primetime cable news block in America for the past several years
Revised:  CNN has been in a fierce ratings competition with the FOX News Channel, which has steadily begun gaining market share against the network, featuring several of the most-watched primetime shows 
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Original:  In addition to aiding research efforts, the money is expected to help strengthen surveillance and increase the stockpiling of surgical masks and other equipment   
Revised:  In addition to aiding research efforts, the money is expected to help strengthen surveillance and increase the stockpiling of surgical masks and other equipment . 
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Original:  The amount exceeds the World Bank estimate of $1.2 billion to $1.4 billion in funds required to contain the bird flu over the next three years.
Revised:  The amount exceeded the World Bank estimate of $1.2 billion to $1.4 billion in funds required to contain the bird flu over the next three years.
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Original:  The amount exceeds the World Bank estimate of $1.2 billion to $1.4 billion in funds required to contain the bird flu over the next three years.
Revised:  The amount exceeds the World Bank estimate of $1.2 billion to $1.4 billion in funds required to contain the avian flu over the next three years.
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Original:  Premier Wen Jiabao personally attended the conference and announced that the country would share more information on outbreaks in the country, including samples that will assist in tracing genetic changese   
Revised:  Premier Wen Jiabao personally attended the conference and announced that the country would share more information on outbreaks in the country, including samples that will assist in tracing genetic changes. 
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Original: The 1.9 billion  dollars in pledges came from 33 countries and a host of multilateral institutions at the end of a meet co-ordinated by the World Bank in Beijing .
Revised: The 1.9 billion dollars in pledges came from 33 countries and a host of multilateral institutions at the end of a meet co-ordinated by the World Bank .
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Original:  The amount exceeded the World Bank estimate of $1.2 billion to $1.4 billion in funds required to contain the avian flu over the next three years.
Revised:  The amount exceeded the organization's estimate of $1.2 billion to $1.4 billion in funds required to contain the avian flu over the next three years.
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Original: According to , , the Sheriff for , Arizona, will endorse presidential candidate next week at a New Hampshire campaign event . Arpaio, who refers to himself as "America’s Toughest Sheriff", is known for his tough stand on illegal immigration.
Revised:  , the Sheriff for , Arizona, will endorse presidential candidate next week at a New Hampshire campaign event . Arpaio, who refers to himself as "America’s Toughest Sheriff", is known for his tough stand on illegal immigration.
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Original:   The endorsement may help Perry among conservatives who consider him soft on illegal immigration for his signing of the in 2001 and his opposition to a  full-length border fence with Mexico 
Revised:  The endorsement could help Perry with who consider him soft on illegal immigration for his signing of the in 2001 and his opposition to a full-length border fence with Mexico 
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