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Original:  In 1927  the United Kingdom changed its formal title to the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, usually shortened to Britain and (after 1945) to the United Kingdom or UK.
Revised:  In 1927 , the United Kingdom changed its formal title to the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, usually shortened to Britain and (after 1945) to the United Kingdom or UK.
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Original:  As of 22 June 2021, there have been 4,651,988 confirmed cases and 152,490 deaths .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Throughout 2021 , the United Kingdom experienced a disruption in the supply chain.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Throughout 2021 , the United Kingdom experienced a disruption in the supply chain.
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Original: The first COVID-19 vaccine was approved and began it's rollout in the UK in early December, 15 million vaccine doses had been given to predominantly those most vulnerable to the virus by mid-February.
Revised: The first COVID-19 vaccine was approved and began its rollout in the UK in early December, 15 million vaccine doses had been given to predominantly those most vulnerable to the virus by mid-February.
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Original:  The most extreme success story is doubtless the Manhattan Project that developed nuclear weapons.
Revised:  The most extreme success story is undoubtedly the Manhattan Project that developed nuclear weapons.
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Original:  In the case developing countries many follow the same fashion.
Revised:  Many developing countries follow the same fashion.
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Original:  As a general rule, more funding is available in science and engineering disciplines than in the arts and social sciences   .
Revised:  As a general rule, more funding is available in science and engineering disciplines than in the arts and social sciences . .
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Original: Physical principles Sound waves propagating through a liquid at ultrasonic frequencies do so with a wavelength that is dramatically longer than molecular dimensions or the bond length between atoms in the molecule.
Revised: Physical principles Sound waves propagating through a liquid at ultrasonic frequencies have wavelengths many times longer than the molecular dimensions or the bond length between atoms in the molecule.
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Original:  Therefore, the sound wave cannot affect that vibrational energy of the bond, and can therefore not directly increase the internal energy of a molecule.
Revised:  Therefore, the sound wave cannot directly affect the vibrational energy of the bond, and can therefore not directly increase the internal energy of a molecule.
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Original:  The high temperatures and pressures result in the chemical excitation of any matter that was inside of, or in the immediate surroundings of the bubble as it rapidly imploded.
Revised:  The high temperatures and pressures result in the chemical excitation of any matter within or very near the bubble as it rapidly imploded.
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Original:  A broad variety of outcomes can result from acoustic cavitation ,
Revised:  A broad variety of outcomes can result from acoustic cavitation 
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Original:  increased chemical activity in the solution due to the formation of primary and secondary radical reactions, and increase chemical activity through the formation of new, relatively stable chemical species that can diffuse further into the solution to create chemical effects (for example, the formation of hydrogen peroxide from the combination of two hydroxyl radicals formed following the dissociation of water vapor inside the collapsing bubbles what water is exposed to ultrasound  .
Revised:  increased chemical activity in the solution due to the formation of primary and secondary radical reactions, and increased chemical activity through the formation of new, relatively stable chemical species that can diffuse further into the solution to create chemical effects (for example, the formation of hydrogen peroxide from the combination of two hydroxyl radicals formed following the dissociation of water vapor inside the collapsing bubbles what water is exposed to ultrasound .
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Original:  increased chemical activity in the solution due to the formation of primary and secondary radical reactions, and increase chemical activity through the formation of new, relatively stable chemical species that can diffuse further into the solution to create chemical effects (for example, the formation of hydrogen peroxide from the combination of two hydroxyl radicals formed following the dissociation of water vapor inside the collapsing bubbles what water is exposed to ultrasound  .
Revised:  increased chemical activity in the solution due to the formation of primary and secondary radical reactions, and increase chemical activity through the formation of new, relatively stable chemical species that can diffuse further into the solution to create chemical effects (for example, the formation of hydrogen peroxide from the combination of two hydroxyl radicals following the dissociation of water vapor inside the collapsing bubbles what water is exposed to ultrasound .
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Original:  increased chemical activity in the solution due to the formation of primary and secondary radical reactions, and increase chemical activity through the formation of new, relatively stable chemical species that can diffuse further into the solution to create chemical effects (for example, the formation of hydrogen peroxide from the combination of two hydroxyl radicals formed following the dissociation of water vapor inside the collapsing bubbles what water is exposed to ultrasound  .
Revised:  increased chemical activity in the solution due to the formation of primary and secondary radical reactions, and increase chemical activity through the formation of new, relatively stable chemical species that can diffuse further into the solution to create chemical effects (for example, the formation of hydrogen peroxide from the combination of two hydroxyl radicals formed following the dissociation of water vapor within collapsing bubbles when water is exposed to ultrasound .
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Original:  increased chemical activity in the solution due to the formation of primary and secondary radical reactions, and increase chemical activity through the formation of new, relatively stable chemical species that can diffuse further into the solution to create chemical effects (for example, the formation of hydrogen peroxide from the combination of two hydroxyl radicals formed following the dissociation of water vapor inside the collapsing bubbles what water is exposed to ultrasound  .
Revised:  increased chemical activity in the solution due to the formation of primary and secondary radical reactions, and increase chemical activity through the formation of new, relatively stable chemical species that can diffuse further into the solution to create chemical effects (for example, the formation of hydrogen peroxide from the combination of two hydroxyl radicals formed following the dissociation of water vapor inside the collapsing bubbles what water is exposed to ultrasound ) .
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Original: History The influence of sonic waves traveling through liquids was first reported by Robert Williams Wood (1868–1955) and Alfred Lee Loomis (1887–1975) in 1927.
Revised: History The influence of sonic waves travelling through liquids was first reported by Robert Williams Wood (1868–1955) and Alfred Lee Loomis (1887–1975) in 1927.
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Original:  He came to the conclusion that sound does travel faster in water, but because of the water's density compared to our earth's atmosphere it was incredibly hard to get the sonic waves  into the water.
Revised:  He came to the conclusion that sound does travel faster in water, but because of the water's density compared to earth's atmosphere it was incredibly hard to get the sonic waves into the water.
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Original:  After lots of research they decided that the best way to disperse sound into the water was to make loud noises into the water by creating bubbles that were made at the same time as the sound.
Revised:  Due to the sudden density change, much of the energy is lost, similar to shining a flashlight towards a piece of glass; some of the light is transmitted into the glass, but much of it is lost to reflection outwards. Similarly with an air-water interface, almost all of the sound is reflected off the water, instead of being transmitted into it. After much research they decided that the best way to disperse sound into the water was to make loud noises into the water by creating bubbles that were made at the same time as the sound.
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Original:  But another road block they ran into  was the ratio of the amount of time it took for the lower frequency waves to penetrate the bubbles walls and access the water around the bubble, and then time from that point to the point on the other end of the body of water.
Revised:  Citation needed was the ratio of the amount of time it took for the lower frequency waves to penetrate the bubbles walls and access the water around the bubble, and then time from that point to the point on the other end of the body of water.
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Original:  But another road block they ran into  was the ratio of the amount of time it took for the lower frequency waves to penetrate the bubbles walls and access the water around the bubble, and then time from that point to the point on the other end of the body of water.
Revised:  But another road block they ran into Another issue was the ratio of the amount of time it took for the lower frequency waves to penetrate the bubbles walls and access the water around the bubble, and then time from that point to the point on the other end of the body of water.
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Original:  But another road block they ran into  was the ratio of the amount of time it took for the lower frequency waves to penetrate the bubbles walls and access the water around the bubble, and then time from that point to the point on the other end of the body of water.
Revised:  But another road block they ran into was the ratio of the amount of time it took for the lower frequency waves to penetrate the bubbles walls and access the water around the bubble, compared to the time from that point to the point on the other end of the body of water.
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Original:  The high temperatures and pressures result in the chemical excitation of any matter within or very near the bubble as it rapidly imploded .
Revised:  The high temperatures and pressures result in the chemical excitation of any matter within or very near the bubble as it rapidly implodes .
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Original:  effectively acting to activate heterogenous catalysts.
Revised:  effectively acting to activate heterogeneous catalysts.
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Original:  Due to the aluminium foil's thin thickness and weakness, the cavitation quickly results in fragmentation and destruction of the foil.
Revised:  Due to the aluminium foil's thinness and weakness, the cavitation quickly results in fragmentation and destruction of the foil.
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Original:  Citation needed Another issue was the ratio of the amount of time it took for the lower frequency waves to penetrate the bubbles walls and access the water around the bubble, compared to the time from that point to the point on the other end of the body of water.
Revised:  Another issue was the ratio of the amount of time it took for the lower frequency waves to penetrate the bubbles walls and access the water around the bubble, compared to the time from that point to the point on the other end of the body of water.
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Original:  Sonoluminescence is a consequence of the same cavitation phenomena that is responsible for homogeneous sonochemistry.
Revised:  Sonoluminescence is a consequence of the same cavitation phenomena that are responsible for homogeneous sonochemistry.
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Original: IIIAngina with mild exertionHaving difficulties walking one or two stores or climbing one flight of stairs at normal pace and conditions.
Revised: IIIAngina with mild exertionHaving difficulties walking one or two blocks or climbing one flight of stairs at normal pace and conditions.
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Original: Personal life Barry Buzan born in London, but his family emigrated to Canada in 1954.
Revised: Personal life Barry Buzan isborn in London, but his family emigrated to Canada in 1954.
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Original: Barry Buzan in 2019 on a panel at the University of London Barry Gordon Buzan (born 28 April 1946) is Emeritus Professor of International Relations at the London School of Economics and honorary professor at the University of Copenhagen and Jilin University.
Revised: Barry Gordon Buzan (born 28 April 1946) is Emeritus Professor of International Relations at the London School of Economics and honorary professor at the University of Copenhagen and Jilin University.
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Original:  His brother is author Tony Buzan, with whom he co-authored The Mind Map Book.
Revised:  His brother was author Tony Buzan, with whom he co-authored The Mind Map Book.
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Original:  His brother was author Tony Buzan, with whom he co-authored The Mind Map Book.
Revised:  His brother is author Tony Buzan, with whom he co-authored The Mind Map Book.
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Original:  He was the lead author of the American Association for the Advancement of Science "Atlas of Population and URL From 2005 to 2008 he edited the United Nations Environment Programme Yearbook (formerly Geo URL
Revised:  He was the lead author of the American Association for the Advancement of Science "Atlas of Population and URL From 2005 to 2008 he edited the United Nations Environment Programme Yearbook (formerly Geo Yearbook).
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Original:  He was the lead author of the American Association for the Advancement of Science "Atlas of Population and URL From 2005 to 2008 he edited the United Nations Environment Programme Yearbook (formerly Geo Yearbook).
Revised:  He was the lead author of the American Association for the Advancement of Science "Atlas of Population and Environment." From 2005 to 2008 he edited the United Nations Environment Programme Yearbook (formerly Geo Yearbook).
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Original: The story  "In ancient times there existed in the country of Serendippo, in the Far East, a great and powerful king by the name of Giaffer.
Revised: The story this story is not good "In ancient times there existed in the country of Serendippo, in the Far East, a great and powerful king by the name of Giaffer.
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Original: The story  "In ancient times there existed in the country of Serendippo, in the Far East, a great and powerful king by the name of Giaffer.
Revised: The story "In ancient times there existed in the country of Serendippo, in the Far East, a great and powerful king that sucks at saying his name of Giaffer.
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Original: The      lost camel No sooner do the three princes arrive abroad than they trace clues to identify precisely a camel they have never seen.
Revised: The The lost camel No sooner do the three princes arrive abroad than they trace clues to identify precisely a camel they have never seen.
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Original:  Beramo spares the lives of the three princes, lavishes rich rewards on them, and appoints them to be his advisors   .
Revised:  Beramo spares the lives of the three princes, lavishes rich rewards on them, and appoints them to be his advisors . .
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Original:  The story first came to English via a French translation, and now exists in several out-of-print translations. e .g. Remer, T. G., Ed. (1965) Serendipity and the Three Princes of Serendip;
Revised:  The story first came to English via a French translation, and now exists in several out-of-print translations. E .g. Remer, T. G., Ed. (1965) Serendipity and the Three Princes of Serendip;
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Original:  University of Oklahoma Press, Norman, OK. and Hodges, E. J. (1964)  The Three Princes of Serendip.
Revised:  University of Oklahoma Press, Norman, OK. Also e.g., Hodges, E. J. (1964) The Three Princes of Serendip.
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Original:  University of Oklahoma Press, Norman, OK. and Hodges, E. J. (1964)  The Three Princes of Serendip.
Revised:  University of Oklahoma Press, Norman, OK. and Hodges, E. J. (1964) . The Three Princes of Serendip.
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Original:  Atheneum, New York ."serendipity, n." OED Online.
Revised:  New York: Atheneum. ."serendipity, n." OED Online.
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Original:  With the exception of the well-known camel story,See, for instance,  The Lost Camel  in Idries Shah's collection World Tales.
Revised:  With the exception of the well-known camel story,See, for instance, " The Lost Camel in Idries Shah's collection World Tales.
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Original:  With the exception of the well-known camel story,See, for instance,  The Lost Camel  in Idries Shah's collection World Tales.
Revised:  With the exception of the well-known camel story,See, for instance, The Lost Camel " in Idries Shah's collection World Tales.
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Original:  More recently scholars have begun to speak of conduction and inference to the best explanation.
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Original:  Deduction is inference deriving logical conclusions from premises known or assumed to be true , with the laws of valid inference being studied in logic.
Revised:  Deduction is inference deriving logical conclusions from premises known or assumed to be ftrue , with the laws of valid inference being studied in logic.
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Original:  Deduction is inference deriving logical conclusions from premises known or assumed to be ftrue , with the laws of valid inference being studied in logic.
Revised:  Deduction is inference deriving logical conclusions from premises known or assumed to be true , with the laws of valid inference being studied in logic.
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Original:  A third type of inference is sometimes distinguished, notably by Charles Sanders Peirce, distinguishing abduction from induction.
Revised:  A third type of inference is sometimes distinguished, notably by Charles Sanders Peirce, contradistinguishing abduction from induction.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The reader can check that the premises and conclusion are true, but logic is concerned with inference: does the truth of the conclusion follow from that of the premises?
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Original:  If the premises are true, then the conclusion is necessarily true, too.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Now we turn to an invalid form.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Now we turn to an invalid form.
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Original:  (True) Therefore, John Lennon was French. (False) When a valid argument is used to derive a false conclusion from a false premise, the inference is valid because it follows the form of a correct inference.
Revised:  (True) Therefore, John Lennon was French. (False) 
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Original:  (Valid, True) In this case we have one false premise and one true premise where a true conclusion has been inferred.
Revised:  (Valid, True) 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Example for definition #2 Evidence: It is the early 1950s and you are an American stationed in the Soviet Union.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Evidence: It is the early 1950s and you are an American stationed in the Soviet Union.
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Original: Lloyd Lionel Gaines (1911, Water Valley, Mississippi , United States – disappeared March 19, 1939, Chicago  ) was the plaintiff in Gaines v. Canada (1938), one of the most important early court cases in the 20th-century U.S. civil rights movement.
Revised: Lloyd Lionel Gaines (1911, Water Valley, Mississippi – disappeared March 19, 1939, Chicago ) was the plaintiff in Gaines v. Canada (1938), one of the most important early court cases in the 20th-century U.S. civil rights movement.
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Original: Lloyd Lionel Gaines (  1911 , Water Valley, Mississippi – disappeared March 19, 1939 , Chicago, Illinois ) was the plaintiff in Gaines v. Canada (1938), one of the most important early court cases in the 20th-century U.S. civil rights movement.
Revised: Lloyd Lionel Gaines ( born 1911 , Water Valley, Mississippi – disappeared March 19, 1939 , Chicago, Illinois ) was the plaintiff in Gaines v. Canada (1938), one of the most important early court cases in the 20th-century U.S. civil rights movement.
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Original: Lloyd Lionel Gaines (  1911 , Water Valley, Mississippi – disappeared March 19, 1939 , Chicago, Illinois ) was the plaintiff in Gaines v. Canada (1938), one of the most important early court cases in the 20th-century U.S. civil rights movement.
Revised: Lloyd Lionel Gaines ( 1911 – disappeared March 19, 1939 , Chicago, Illinois ) was the plaintiff in Gaines v. Canada (1938), one of the most important early court cases in the 20th-century U.S. civil rights movement.
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Original: Lloyd Lionel Gaines (  1911 , Water Valley, Mississippi – disappeared March 19, 1939 , Chicago, Illinois ) was the plaintiff in Gaines v. Canada (1938), one of the most important early court cases in the 20th-century U.S. civil rights movement.
Revised: Lloyd Lionel Gaines ( 1911 , Water Valley, Mississippi – disappeared March 19, 1939 ) was the plaintiff in Gaines v. Canada (1938), one of the most important early court cases in the 20th-century U.S. civil rights movement.
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Original: In his last letter to his mother, dated March 3, Gaines said : Gaines also wrote that his accommodations at the YMCA were paid through March 7 and if he stayed in Chicago beyond that date, he would have to make "other arrangements . "  After that, brothers at an Alpha Phi Alpha house took him in.
Revised: In his last letter to his mother, dated March 3, Gaines wrote : Gaines also wrote that his accommodations at the YMCA were paid through March 7 and if he stayed in Chicago beyond that date, he would have to make "other arrangements . " After that, brothers at an Alpha Phi Alpha house took him in.
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Original: In his last letter to his mother, dated March 3, Gaines said : Gaines also wrote that his accommodations at the YMCA were paid through March 7 and if he stayed in Chicago beyond that date, he would have to make "other arrangements . "  After that, brothers at an Alpha Phi Alpha house took him in.
Revised: In his last letter to his mother, dated March 3, Gaines said : Gaines also wrote that his accommodations at the YMCA were paid through March 7 , and that if he stayed in Chicago beyond that date, he would have to make "other arrangements . " After that, brothers at an Alpha Phi Alpha house took him in.
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Original: In his last letter to his mother, dated March 3, Gaines said : Gaines also wrote that his accommodations at the YMCA were paid through March 7 and if he stayed in Chicago beyond that date, he would have to make "other arrangements . "  After that, brothers at an Alpha Phi Alpha house took him in.
Revised: In his last letter to his mother, dated March 3, Gaines said : Gaines also wrote that his accommodations at the YMCA were paid through March 7 and if he stayed in Chicago beyond that date, he would have to make "other arrangements " After that, brothers at an Alpha Phi Alpha house took him in.
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