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Original:  As the open mic began, 2 large coaches were allowed by police to continue along the road, and initially refused to turn around, before being forced to by sitting protesters blocking the roadway.
Revised:  As the open mic began, two large coaches were allowed by police to continue along the road, and initially refused to turn around, before being forced to by sitting protesters blocking the roadway.
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Original:  Our source, an unnamed legal observer from the Legal Defence and Monitoring Group , has been able to tell us that one male arrested was believed to have an outstanding warrant following an animal rights activism related offense , a female, believed to be his girlfriend, was reported to have been arrested for pushing and swearing at police after the male was arrested, and was arrested under section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment' .
Revised:  Our source, an unnamed legal observer from the Legal Defence and Monitoring Group that one man arrested was believed to have an outstanding warrant following an animal rights activism related offense , a female, believed to be his girlfriend, was reported to have been arrested for pushing and swearing at police after the male was arrested, and was arrested under section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment' .
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Original:  Our source, an unnamed legal observer from the Legal Defence and Monitoring Group , has been able to tell us that one male arrested was believed to have an outstanding warrant following an animal rights activism related offense , a female, believed to be his girlfriend, was reported to have been arrested for pushing and swearing at police after the male was arrested, and was arrested under section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment' .
Revised:  Our source, an unnamed legal observer from the Legal Defence and Monitoring Group , has been able to tell us that one male arrested was believed to have an outstanding warrant following an animal rights activism related offense . A woman, believed to be his girlfriend, was reported to have been arrested for pushing and swearing at police after the male was arrested, and was arrested under section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment' .
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Original:  Our source, an unnamed legal observer from the Legal Defence and Monitoring Group , has been able to tell us that one male arrested was believed to have an outstanding warrant following an animal rights activism related offense , a female, believed to be his girlfriend, was reported to have been arrested for pushing and swearing at police after the male was arrested, and was arrested under section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment' .
Revised:  Our source, an unnamed legal observer from the Legal Defence and Monitoring Group , has been able to tell us that one male arrested was believed to have an outstanding warrant following an animal rights activism related offense , a female, believed to be his girlfriend, was reported to have been arrested for pushing and swearing at police after the male was arrested, and was arrested under section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police intentional harassment .
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Original:  The third, a male , was believed to have been arrested after allegedly urinating on the wall of the Scotland Yard building, in public view, and was arrested under either section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment ' or for Indecent Exposure under Section 66 of the Sexual Offences Act 2003 , reports are unclear as to which.
Revised:  The third, a man , was believed to have been arrested after allegedly urinating on the wall of the Scotland Yard building, in public view, and was arrested under either section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment ' or for Indecent Exposure under Section 66 of the Sexual Offences Act 2003 , reports are unclear as to which.
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Original:  The third, a male , was believed to have been arrested after allegedly urinating on the wall of the Scotland Yard building, in public view, and was arrested under either section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment ' or for Indecent Exposure under Section 66 of the Sexual Offences Act 2003 , reports are unclear as to which.
Revised:  The third, a male , was believed to have been arrested after allegedly urinating on the wall of the Scotland Yard building, in public view, and was arrested under either section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police intentional harassment or for indecent exposure under Section 66 of the Sexual Offences Act 2003 , reports are unclear as to which.
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Original:  The third, a male , was believed to have been arrested after allegedly urinating on the wall of the Scotland Yard building, in public view, and was arrested under either section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment ' or for Indecent Exposure under Section 66 of the Sexual Offences Act 2003 , reports are unclear as to which.
Revised:  The third, a male , was believed to have been arrested after allegedly urinating on the wall of the Scotland Yard building, in public view, and was arrested under either section 5 of the Public Order Act 1986, for causing the police 'Intentional harassment ' or for Indecent Exposure under Section 66 of the Sexual Offences Act 2003 ; reports are unclear as to which.
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Original:  FurtherPhotographs from the protest are available for viewing, in the following 2 facebook albums: 1: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2: URL Images remain copyright of the photographer (© Jules Mattsson 2009).
Revised:  1: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2: URL Images remain copyright of the photographer (© Jules Mattsson 2009).
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Original:  FurtherPhotographs from the protest are available for viewing, in the following 2 facebook albums: 1: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2: URL Images remain copyright of the photographer (© Jules Mattsson 2009).
Revised:  FurtherPhotographs from the protest are available for viewing, in the following 2 facebook albums: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2: URL Images remain copyright of the photographer (© Jules Mattsson 2009).
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Original:  FurtherPhotographs from the protest are available for viewing, in the following 2 facebook albums: 1: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2: URL Images remain copyright of the photographer (© Jules Mattsson 2009).
Revised:  FurtherPhotographs from the protest are available for viewing, in the following 2 facebook albums: 1: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Images remain copyright of the photographer (© Jules Mattsson 2009).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Jules Mattsson juleshs31 at%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% hotmail.com --Juleshs31 (talk) 13:49, 28 May 2009 (UTC
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% at%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% hotmail.com --Juleshs31 (talk) 13:49, 28 May 2009 (UTC
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Jules Mattsson juleshs31 at%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% hotmail.com --Juleshs31 (talk) 13:49, 28 May 2009 (UTC
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Jules Mattsson juleshs31 %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% hotmail.com --Juleshs31 (talk) 13:49, 28 May 2009 (UTC
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Jules Mattsson juleshs31 at%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% hotmail.com --Juleshs31 (talk) 13:49, 28 May 2009 (UTC
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Jules Mattsson juleshs31 at%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% --Juleshs31 (talk) 13:49, 28 May 2009 (UTC
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Original:  Wikinews has learned from an anonymous legal observer from the Legal Defence and Monitoring Group  that one man arrested was believed to have an outstanding warrant following an animal rights activism related offense.
Revised:  Wikinews learned from an anonymous legal observer from the Legal Defence and Monitoring Group that one man arrested was believed to have an outstanding warrant following an animal rights activism related offense.
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Original:   As the speeches ended, activists set up a sound system and held an open mic in the road . Police did not shut down this road during the protest and had allowed cars to continue down it, all of which were instructed by activists and press to turn around and try another route.
Revised:  As speeches ended, activists set up a sound system and held an open mic in the road . Police did not shut down this road during the protest and had allowed cars to continue down it, all of which were instructed by activists and press to turn around and try another route.
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Original:   As the speeches ended, activists set up a sound system and held an open mic in the road . Police did not shut down this road during the protest and had allowed cars to continue down it, all of which were instructed by activists and press to turn around and try another route.
Revised:  As the speeches ended, protesters held an open mic in the road . Police did not shut down this road during the protest and had allowed cars to continue down it, all of which were instructed by activists and press to turn around and try another route.
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Original:  Image:UPLOAD_UCAPV_RALLY_NSY.jpg|frame|Rally at Scotland Yard
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Original:  The three are believed to have been taken to Charing Cross police station  
Revised:  The three are believed to have been taken to Charing Cross police station . 
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Original:  The bomber blew himself up inside a mosque in Shiraz, injuring over 200 people and killing 13
Revised:  A bomber blew himself up inside a mosque in Shiraz, injuring over 200 people and killing 13
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Original: This past weekend at the San Mateo Fairgrounds saw the 4th annual Maker Faire .
Revised: The 4th annual Maker Faire took place this past weekend at the San Mateo Fairgrounds saw the 4th annual Maker Faire .
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Original: This past weekend at the San Mateo Fairgrounds saw the 4th annual Maker Faire .
Revised: This past weekend at the San Mateo Fairground .
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Original:  This year attendance was expected to above 80,000 people , quadruple what the Fair had started at just four years prior.
Revised:  This year , more than 80,000 people , quadruple what the Fair had started at just four years prior.
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Original:  This year attendance was expected to above 80,000 people , quadruple what the Fair had started at just four years prior.
Revised:  This year attendance was expected to above 80,000 people were expected to attend; quadruple the attendance of just four years prior.
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Original:  On Saturday night  it was reported that attendance was up decently from the yearprior . Maker Faire, the self declared "World's Largest DIY Festival" was filled with hundreds of booths by Makers and Crafters alike in the main halls alone  .
Revised:  On Saturday night , it was reported that attendance was up decently from the yearprior . Maker Faire, the self declared "World's Largest DIY Festival" was filled with hundreds of booths by Makers and Crafters alike in the main halls alone .
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Original:  On Saturday night  it was reported that attendance was up decently from the yearprior . Maker Faire, the self declared "World's Largest DIY Festival" was filled with hundreds of booths by Makers and Crafters alike in the main halls alone  .
Revised:  On Saturday night it was reported that attendance was up considerably over last year's event . Maker Faire, the self declared "World's Largest DIY Festival" was filled with hundreds of booths by Makers and Crafters alike in the main halls alone .
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Original:  On Saturday night  it was reported that attendance was up decently from the yearprior . Maker Faire, the self declared "World's Largest DIY Festival" was filled with hundreds of booths by Makers and Crafters alike in the main halls alone  .
Revised:  On Saturday night it was reported that attendance was up decently from the yearprior . Maker Faire, the self declared "World's Largest DIY Festival" , offered a forum where hundreds of makers and crafters alike manned booths where they displayed their work. In the main halls alone .
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Original:  Outside the expo halls  was also filled with many interesting projects, many of which where mobile.
Revised:  Outside the expo halls was also filled with many interesting projects, some of which where mobile.
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Original:  In addition to all  the projects on display, there were a number of on stage presentations.
Revised:  In addition to all of the projects on display, there were a number of on stage presentations.
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Original:  In addition to all  the projects on display, there were a number of on stage presentations.
Revised:  In addition to all the projects on display, there were a number of on-stage presentations.
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Original:  The biggest presentation of the weekend was  Adam Savage who spoke on the topic of his "Colossal Failures".
Revised:  The biggest presentation of the weekend was given by Adam Savage who spoke on the topic of his "Colossal Failures".
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Original:  During his talk, the Fiesta Hall was completely packed .
Revised:  During his talk, the Fiesta Hall was filled to capacity .
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Original:  Along side of that was a very common thread of "going green", alternative fuels vehicles, crafting, steampunk and sciences for the young  .
Revised:  In addition, "going green", alternative fuels vehicles, crafting, steampunk and sciences for the young .
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Original:  Along side of that was a very common thread of "going green", alternative fuels vehicles, crafting, steampunk and sciences for the young  .
Revised:  Along side of that was a very common thread of "going green", alternative fuel vehicles, crafting, steampunk and sciences for the young .
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Original:  The first Maker Faire,  in 2006, had approximately 20,000 people in attendance.
Revised:  The first Maker Faire, which took place in 2006, had approximately 20,000 people in attendance.
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Original: The 4th annual Maker Faire took place this past weekend at the San Mateo Fairground  .
Revised: The 4th annual Maker Faire took place this past weekend at the San Mateo Fairground in San Mateo, California .
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Original: Make: Technology on your time The 4th annual Maker Faire took place this past weekend at the San Mateo Fairground in San Mateo, California  .
Revised: Make: Technology on your time The 4th annual Maker Faire took place this past weekend at the San Mateo Fairground in San Mateo, California located in the United States .
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Original: Maker Faire, the self declared "World's Largest DIY Festival", offered a forum where hundreds of makers and crafters alike manned booths where they displayed their work.
Revised: Maker Faire, the self-declared "World's Largest DIY Festival", offered a forum where hundreds of makers and crafters alike manned booths where they displayed their work.
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Original: Maker Faire, the self declared "World's Largest DIY Festival", offered a forum where hundreds of makers and crafters alike manned booths where they displayed their work.
Revised: Maker Faire, the self declared "World's Largest DIY Festival", offers a forum where hundreds of makers and crafters alike manned booths where they displayed their work.
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Original: Maker Faire, the self-declared "World's Largest DIY Festival", offers a forum where hundreds of makers and crafters alike manned booths where they displayed their work.
Revised: Maker Faire, the self-declared "World's Largest DIY Festival", offers a forum where hundreds of makers and crafters alike man booths where they displayed their work.
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Original: Maker Faire, the self-declared "World's Largest DIY Festival", offers a forum where hundreds of makers and crafters alike manned booths where they displayed their work.
Revised: Maker Faire, the self-declared "World's Largest DIY Festival", offers a forum where hundreds of makers and crafters alike manned booths where they display their work.
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Original:  Sri Lanka gained the support of China, Egypt, India and Cuba . Related new
Revised:  Sri Lanka gained the support of China, Egypt, India and Cuba Related new
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Original:  Sri Lanka gained the support of China, Egypt, India and Cuba . Related new
Revised:  Sri Lanka gained the support of China, Egypt, India and Cuba . 
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Original: Le Monde, a renowned French newspaper, published on Friday an article showing how the UN deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka - to protect their own activities in the country.
Revised: Le Monde, a French newspaper, published on Friday an article showing how the UN deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka - to protect their own activities in the country.
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Original: Le Monde, a renowned French newspaper, published on Friday an article showing how the UN deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka - to protect their own activities in the country.
Revised: Le Monde, a renowned French newspaper, published on Friday an article showing how the United Nations (UN) deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka - to protect their own activities in the country.
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Original: Le Monde, a renowned French newspaper, published on Friday an article showing how the UN deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka - to protect their own activities in the country.
Revised: Le Monde, a renowned French newspaper, published on Friday an article showing how the UN deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka — to protect their own activities in the country.
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Original:  The United Nations did not publish the number of dead civilians, until it was finaly leaked.
Revised:  The UNT did not publish the number of dead civilians, until it was finaly leaked.
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Original:  The United Nations did not publish the number of dead civilians, until it was finaly leaked.
Revised:  The United Nations did not publish the number of dead civilians, until it was finally leaked.
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Original:  The Times relied on aerial photographs, confidential United Nations documents, witnesses and independent defense experts to understand the final days in the 26 year old Sri Lankan civil war. survivors are interned in the Manik Farm refugee camp.
Revised:  The Times relied on aerial photographs, confidential UN documents, witnesses and independent defense experts to understand the final days in the 26 year old Sri Lankan civil war. survivors are interned in the Manik Farm refugee camp.
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Original: Despite the heavy bombings in the last days of the war, the dead people are still given as an official figure (in the New York Times for instance) .
Revised: Despite the heavy bombings in the last days of the war, the dead people are still given as an official figure which was repeated in The New York Times for instance) .
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Original: Despite the heavy bombings in the last days of the war, the dead people are still given as an official figure (in the New York Times for instance) .
Revised: Despite the heavy bombings in the last days of the war, the dead people are still given as an official figure (in the New York Times .
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Original:  According to Vijay K. Nambiar, Ban Ki-moon'  chief-of-staff cited by Le Monde, the numbers could be closer to .
Revised:  According to Vijay K. Nambiar, Ban Ki-moon' s chief-of-staff cited by Le Monde, the numbers could be closer to .
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Original: Le Monde, a French newspaper , published on Friday an article showing how the United Nations (UN) deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka — to protect their own activities in the country.
Revised: French newspaper Le Monde published on Friday an article showing how the United Nations (UN) deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka — to protect their own activities in the country.
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Original: Le Monde, a French newspaper , published on Friday an article showing how the United Nations (UN) deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka — to protect their own activities in the country.
Revised: Le Monde, a French newspaper , published on Friday an article accusing the United Nations (UN) deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka — to protect their own activities in the country.
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Original: Le Monde, a French newspaper , published on Friday an article showing how the United Nations (UN) deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka — to protect their own activities in the country.
Revised: Le Monde, a French newspaper , published on Friday an article showing how the United Nations (UN) deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last months of the civil war in Sri Lanka — to protect their own activities in the country.
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Original: Le Monde, a French newspaper , published on Friday an article showing how the United Nations (UN) deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka — to protect their own activities in the country.
Revised: Le Monde, a French newspaper , published on Friday an article showing how the United Nations (UN) deliberately hid the facts about civilian killings during the last month of the war in Sri Lanka in order to protect their own activities in the country.
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Original:  The UNT did not publish the number of dead civilians , until it was finally leaked.
Revised:  The UNT did not publish the number of civilians killed until it was finally leaked.
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Original:  These  figures are corroborated by The Times.
Revised:  These ; these figures are corroborated by The Times.
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Original:  It’s going to end up way more . " said a UN source.
Revised:  It’s going to end up way more " said a UN source.
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Original:  Sri Lanka gained the support of China, Egypt, India and Cuba  
Revised:  Sri Lanka gained the support of China, Egypt, India and Cuba . 
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Original:  [[File:Manuel Zelaya (Brasília, 03 April 2006).jpeg||Honduran President Manuel Zelaya ]] The Organization of American States (OAS)  will proceed in San Pedro Sula, Honduras next week June 2-3 as only one building there suffered damages.
Revised:  [[File:Manuel Zelaya (Brasília, 03 April 2006).jpeg||Honduran President Manuel Zelaya ]] The Organization of American States (OAS) summit will proceed in San Pedro Sula, Honduras next week June 2-3 as only one building there suffered damages.
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Original:   Democracy Bridge in El Progreso also collapsed.
Revised:  The Democracy Bridge in El Progreso also collapsed.
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Original:  He continued his itinerary to meet with the Belize governor-general and prime minister and will then travel to Guatemala and El Salvador.
Revised:  Ma continued his itinerary to meet with the Belize governor-general and prime minister and will then travel to Guatemala and El Salvador.
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