wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Consumers can rest assured that our industry's fountain beverages pose no public health risk , [...] Importantly, our industry meets, and often exceeds, all government health standards in bringing its products to market.
Revised:  Consumers can rest assured that our industry's fountain beverages pose no public health risk . [...] Importantly, our industry meets, and often exceeds, all government health standards in bringing its products to market.
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Original:  Any time any water or liquid sits somewhere, it's just a breeding ground for bacteria," commented Primary Care Physician Alanna Levine   .
Revised:  Any time any water or liquid sits somewhere, it's just a breeding ground for bacteria," commented Primary Care Physician Alanna Levine . .
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Original:  The National Restaurant Association responded to the university's findings in an e-mail statement.
Revised: A professor at the University of California Davis, however, said he believed that a single localised study wasn't enough to come to a conclusion about soda machines throughout the country. "How sanitation regulations are promulgated and enforced in a community are different. Some communities are more on to it than others. How much of a threat it represents? It's probably limited. Once again, it's a matter of what regulations are in place, who pays attention and whether it's being followed," he said, as quoted by CNN. The National Restaurant Association responded to the university's findings in an e-mail statement.
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Original:  it takes only a single dirty hand to spread bacteria over a tube, and it could be easily transferred to the rest of the fountain from there   .
Revised:  it takes only a single dirty hand to spread bacteria over a tube, and it could be easily transferred to the rest of the fountain from there . .
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Original: Catherine Eugenia “Jean” Biden, the mother of U.S. Vice President Joseph R. Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after a suffering from a brief illness—one that was possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
Revised: Catherine Eugenia “Jean” Biden, the mother of U.S. Vice President Joe Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after a suffering from a brief illness—one that was possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
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Original: Catherine Eugenia “Jean” Biden, the mother of United States Vice President Joe Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after a suffering from a brief illness—one that was possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
Revised: Catherine Eugenia “Jean” Biden, the mother of United States Vice President Joseph R. Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after a suffering from a brief illness—one that was possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
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Original: Catherine Eugenia “Jean” Biden, the mother of United States Vice President Joseph R. Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after a suffering from a brief illness—one that was possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
Revised: Catherine Eugenia "Jean" Biden, the mother of United States Vice President Joseph R. Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after a suffering from a brief illness—one that was possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
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Original: U.S. Vice President Joseph R. Biden (Circa 2009) Catherine Eugenia "Jean" Biden, the mother of United States Vice President Joseph R. Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after suffering from a brief illness —one that was possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
Revised: U.S. Vice President Joseph R. Biden (Circa 2009) Catherine Eugenia "Jean" Biden, mother of United States Vice President Joseph R. Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after suffering from a brief illness —one that was possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
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Original: U.S. Vice President Joseph R. Biden (Circa 2009) Catherine Eugenia "Jean" Biden, the mother of United States Vice President Joseph R. Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after suffering from a brief illness —one that was possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
Revised: U.S. Vice President Joseph R. Biden (Circa 2009) Catherine Eugenia "Jean" Biden, the mother of United States Vice President Joseph R. Biden and matriarch of the Biden family, died Friday evening after suffering from a brief illness – possibly related to a recent hip fracture.
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Original:  She was 92-years-old.
Revised:  She was 92 years-old.
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Original:  Mrs. Biden, whom the Vice President often quipped "ran the show" and taught him to believe in what he calls "America ’s creed …
Revised:  Jean Biden, whom the Vice President often quipped "ran the show" and taught him to believe in what he calls "America ’s creed …
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Original:  Mrs. Biden, whom the Vice President often quipped "ran the show" and taught him to believe in what he calls "America ’s creed …
Revised:  Mrs. Biden, whom the Vice President often quipped "ran the show" and taught him to believe in what he calls "America 's creed ...
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Original:  [how] everyone is your equal and nobody is better than you," was always a source of strength for Mr. Biden ever since he was a young working-class boy growing up Scranton.
Revised:  [how] everyone is your equal and nobody is better than you," was always a source of strength for Biden ever since he was a young working-class boy growing up Scranton.
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Original:  For instance, in his autobiography, Mr. Biden recalls, when he was in seventh-grade, being publically mocked by a belligerent nun at school for his speech impediment.
Revised:  In his autobiography, Mr. Biden recalls, when he was in seventh-grade, being publically mocked by a belligerent nun at school for his speech impediment.
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Original:  For instance, in his autobiography, Mr. Biden recalls, when he was in seventh-grade, being publically mocked by a belligerent nun at school for his speech impediment.
Revised:  For instance, in his autobiography, Joe Biden recalls, when he was in seventh-grade, being publically mocked by a belligerent nun at school for his speech impediment.
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Original:  For instance, in his autobiography, Mr. Biden recalls, when he was in seventh-grade, being publically mocked by a belligerent nun at school for his speech impediment.
Revised:  For instance, in his autobiography, Mr. Biden recalls, when in seventh-grade, being publically mocked by a belligerent nun at school for his speech impediment.
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Original:  For instance, in his autobiography, Mr. Biden recalls, when he was in seventh-grade, being publically mocked by a belligerent nun at school for his speech impediment.
Revised:  For instance, in his autobiography, Mr. Biden recalls, when he was in seventh-grade, being publicly mocked at school by a belligerent nun at school for his speech impediment.
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Original:  For instance, in his autobiography, Mr. Biden recalls, when he was in seventh-grade, being publically mocked by a belligerent nun at school for his speech impediment.
Revised:  For instance, in his autobiography, Mr. Biden recalls, when he was in seventh-grade, being publically mocked by a belligerent nun for his speech impediment.
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Original:  Mr. Biden maintains that, upon hearing this, his mother went to the school, confronted this nun, and told her, "If you ever speak to my son like that again, I'll come back and rip that bonnet right off your head!
Revised:  The current Vice President maintains that, upon hearing this, his mother went to the school, confronted this nun, and told her, "If you ever speak to my son like that again, I'll come back and rip that bonnet right off your head!
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Original:  Mr. Biden maintains that, upon hearing this, his mother went to the school, confronted this nun, and told her, "If you ever speak to my son like that again, I'll come back and rip that bonnet right off your head!
Revised:  Mr. Biden maintains that, upon hearing this, his mother went to the school, confronted the nun, telling her, "If you ever speak to my son like that again, I'll come back and rip that bonnet right off your head!
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Original:  He also writes about how his mother, a devout Irish-Catholic, used her faith in comforting him after his wife and daughter were killed in fatal car crash in December 1972 — the month he was elected to his first term as a Delaware Senator.
Revised:  He also writes about how his mother, a devout Irish-Catholic, used her faith in comforting him after his wife and daughter were killed in fatal car crash in December 1972 – the month he was elected to his first term as a Delaware Senator.
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Original:  He emotionally writes how, "After the accident, she told me, 'Joey, God sends no cross that you cannot bear …
Revised:  He emotionally writes how, "After the accident, she told me, 'Joey, God sends no cross that you cannot bear ...
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Original:  '" Mr. Biden also says that his mother taught him to have dignity, self-respect, and principle.
Revised:  '" Biden also states that his mother taught him to have dignity, self-respect, and principle.
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Original:  On the subject , he remembers how  in his youth, "When[ever] I got knocked down by guys bigger than me, and this is the God's truth, she sent me back out [on] the street and told me, 'Bloody their nose so you can walk down the street the next day.'
Revised:  On the subject he remembers how in his youth, "When[ever] I got knocked down by guys bigger than me, and this is the God's truth, she sent me back out [on] the street and told me, 'Bloody their nose so you can walk down the street the next day.'
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Original:  On the subject , he remembers how  in his youth, "When[ever] I got knocked down by guys bigger than me, and this is the God's truth, she sent me back out [on] the street and told me, 'Bloody their nose so you can walk down the street the next day.'
Revised:  On the subject , he remembers how , in his youth, "When[ever] I got knocked down by guys bigger than me, and this is the God's truth, she sent me back out [on] the street and told me, 'Bloody their nose so you can walk down the street the next day.'
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Original:  And that's what I did.'" Mr. Biden said in a separate statement to the media, "Together with my father, her husband of sixty-one years who passed away in 2002, we learned the dignity of hard work, and that you are defined by your sense of honor.
Revised:  And that's what I did.'" Biden said in a separate statement to the media, "Together with my father, her husband of sixty-one years who passed away in 2002, we learned the dignity of hard work, and that you are defined by your sense of honor.
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Original:  He continued to say , "She was the center of our family, and taught all of her children that family is to be treasured, loyalty is paramount, and faith will guide you through the tough times.
Revised:  He continued , "She was the center of our family, and taught all of her children that family is to be treasured, loyalty is paramount, and faith will guide you through the tough times.
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Original:  She believed in us, and because of that, we believed in ourselves." Jean Biden is survived by the Vice President, her two other sons, her daughter, grandchildren, and five great-grandchildren
Revised:  She believed in us, and because of that, we believed in ourselves." Jean Biden is survived by the Vice President, two other sons, her daughter, grandchildren, and five great-grandchildren
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Original: He also writes about how his mother, a devout Irish-Catholic, used her faith in comforting him after his wife and daughter were killed in fatal car crash in December 1972 – the month he was elected to his first term as a Delaware Senator.
Revised: He also writes about how his mother, a devout Irish-Catholic, used her faith in comforting him after his wife and daughter were killed in a car crash in December 1972 – the month he was elected to his first term as a Delaware Senator.
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Original: Croatian president pardons convicted war criminal Zagreb - Outgoing Croatian president Stjepan Mesić pardoned 36-year-old Siniša Rimac, a convicted war criminal, jailed for eight years for participating in executions of Serb civilians back in 1991, when Croatia was at war with Serb forces.
Revised: Croatian president pardons convicted war criminal Outgoing Croatian president Stjepan Mesić pardoned 36-year-old Siniša Rimac, a convicted war criminal, jailed for eight years for participating in executions of Serb civilians back in 1991, when Croatia was at war with Serb forces.
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Original:  Serbian president Boris Tadić commented the act as "anti-european" and "anti-civilisational" that cannot be justified
Revised:  Serbian president Boris Tadić described the act as "anti-european" and "anti-civilisational" that cannot be justified
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Original: Outgoing Croatian president Stjepan Mesić pardoned 36-year-old Siniša Rimac, a convicted war criminal, jailed for eight years for participating in executions of Serb civilians back in 1991, when Croatia was at war with Serb forces.
Revised: File photo of Stjepan MesićOutgoing Croatian president Stjepan Mesić pardoned 36-year-old Siniša Rimac, a convicted war criminal, jailed for eight years for participating in executions of Serb civilians back in 1991, when Croatia was at war with Serb forces.
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Original: Since 1822 the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged surrounded by an ever-changing city  .
Revised: Since 1822 the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged surrounded by the ever-changing city .
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Original: Since 1822 the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged surrounded by an ever-changing city  .
Revised: Since 1822 the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged surrounded by an ever-changing city of New York City .
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Original: Since 1822 the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged surrounded by the ever-changing city of New York City .
Revised: Since 1822 the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged surrounded by the ever-changing city of NYC .
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Original:  The move was originally set for January, but was delayed until this month to allow time to add more safety and security items to the new facility   
Revised:  The move was originally set for January, but was delayed until this month to allow time to add more safety and security items to the new facility . 
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Original: Since 1822  the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged  surrounded by the ever-changing city of NYC.
Revised: Since 1822 , the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged surrounded by the ever-changing city of NYC.
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Original: Since 1822  the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged  surrounded by the ever-changing city of NYC.
Revised: Since 1822 the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged and surrounded by the ever-changing city of NYC.
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Original: Since 1822  the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged  surrounded by the ever-changing city of NYC.
Revised: Since 1822 the Fulton Fish Market on South Street in Lower Manhattan has been operating virtually unchanged surrounded by the ever-changing NYC.
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Original:  It is expected to be relocated to a new $85 million, 400, 00-square-foot facility at Hunts Point in The Bronx beginning this week.
Revised:  It is expected to be relocated to a new $85 million, 400, 000-square-foot facility at Hunts Point in The Bronx beginning this week.
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Original:  The move was originally set for January, but was delayed until this month to allow time to add more safety and security items to the new facility.
Revised:  Originally set for January, but was delayed until this month to allow time to add more safety and security items to the new facility.
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Original:  The move was originally set for January, but was delayed until this month to allow time to add more safety and security items to the new facility.
Revised:  The move was originally set for January, the move was delayed until this month to allow time to add more safety and security items to the new facility.
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Original:  The move was originally set for January, but was delayed until this month to allow time to add more safety and security items to the new facility.
Revised:  The move was originally set for January, but was delayed until this month to allow time to add more safety and security items at the new facility.
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Original:  Some restaruant buyers expressed concern that a move to the new facility will raise prices at fishmonger stalls.
Revised:  Some restaruant food buyers expressed concern that a move to the new facility will raise prices at fishmonger stalls.
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Original:  Rudy Washington, deputy to former mayor Rudy Giuliani, said that opening the fish unloading operations to a bidding process could lead again to mafia control.
Revised:  Rudy Washington, deputy to former mayor Rudy Giuliani, said that a plan by the city to open the fish unloading operations to a bidding process could lead again to mafia control.
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Original: Some restaruant food buyers expressed concern that a move to the new facility will raise fishmonger prices.
Revised: Some restaurant food buyers expressed concern that a move to the new facility will raise fishmonger prices.
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Original: A similar Emirates air Boeing 777-300 landing at Heathrow airport Police brought charges against two men in connection to a bomb threat that delayed a Dubai bound Emirates air flight departing from London's Heathrow Airport.
Revised: A similar Emirates air Boeing 777-300 landing at Heathrow airport Police brought charges against two men in connection to a bomb threat that delayed a Dubai bound Emirates flight departing from London's Heathrow Airport.
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Original:  58-year-old Robert Fowles was charged with making Bomb threats and public drunkenness, along with 48-year-old Alexander McGinn who was also charged with public drunkenness.
Revised:  58-year-old Robert Fowles was charged with making bomb threats and public drunkenness, along with 48-year-old Alexander McGinn who was also charged with public drunkenness.
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Original: A similar Emirates air Boeing 777-300 landing at Heathrow airport Police brought charges against two men in connection to a bomb threat that delayed a Dubai bound Emirates flight departing from London's Heathrow Airport.
Revised: A similar Emirates air Boeing 777-300 landing at Heathrow Airport Police brought charges against two men in connection to a bomb threat that delayed a Dubai bound Emirates flight departing from London's Heathrow Airport.
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Original: British Prime Minister Gordon Brown said  Saturday that the nations natural gas reserves will not run out in spite of record demand.
Revised: British Prime Minister Gordon Brown said on Saturday that the nations natural gas reserves will not run out in spite of record demand.
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Original: British Prime Minister Gordon Brown said  Saturday that the nations natural gas reserves will not run out in spite of record demand.
Revised: British Prime Minister Gordon Brown said Saturday that the nation's natural gas reserves will not run out in spite of record demand.
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Original:  Gas supplies heat homes and cook food A supplier National Grid issues two "balancing alerts", which mean a possible supply shortfall, which were promptly lifted.
Revised:  Gas supplies heat homes and cook food A supplier , National Grid, issued two "balancing alerts", which mean a possible supply shortfall, which were promptly lifted.
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Original:  The cold snap has caused at least two deaths, a 90-year-old woman had frozen to death in her garden in Barnsley, and a 42-year-old  found frozen in Newcastle
Revised:  The cold snap has caused at least two deaths, a 90-year-old woman had frozen to death in her garden in Barnsley, and a 42-year-old was found frozen in Newcastle
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Original:   The cold snap has caused at least two  deaths, a 90-year-old woman  had frozen to death in her garden in Barnsley, and a 42-year-old  was found frozen in Newcastle 
Revised:  The cold snap has caused at least two deaths, a 90-year-old woman who had frozen to death in her garden in Barnsley, and a 42-year-old was found frozen in Newcastle 
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Original:   The cold snap has caused at least two  deaths, a 90-year-old woman  had frozen to death in her garden in Barnsley, and a 42-year-old  was found frozen in Newcastle 
Revised:  The cold snap has caused at least two deaths, a 90-year-old woman had frozen to death in her garden in Barnsley, and a 42-year-old who was found frozen in Newcastle 
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Original:  This third balancing alert is expected to last for the next few days, and is said not to be due to the cold weather — which is expected to continue for at least a week — but due to problems in Norwegian gas fields.
Revised:  This third balancing alert is expected to last for the next few days, and is said not to be due to the cold weather – which is expected to continue for at least a week — but due to problems in Norwegian gas fields.
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Original:  This third balancing alert is expected to last for the next few days, and is said not to be due to the cold weather — which is expected to continue for at least a week — but due to problems in Norwegian gas fields.
Revised:  This third balancing alert is expected to last for the next few days, and is said not to be due to the cold weather — which is expected to continue for at least a week – but due to problems in Norwegian gas fields.
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Original:  Another staple related to the cold snap, rock salt, is feared to run short .
Revised:  Another staple related to the cold snap, rock salt, is feared in short supply .
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Original:  Local governments pledged to conserve supplies by 25\% , and 12,000 tonnes from a plant in Cheshire have been sent to the hardest hit counties, as supposed to Germany as previously earmarked .
Revised:  Local governments pledged to conserve supplies through a 25\% , and 12,000 tonnes from a plant in Cheshire have been sent to the hardest hit counties, as supposed to Germany as previously earmarked .
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Original:  Gas supplies heat homes and cook food A supplier, National Grid, issued two "balancing alerts", which mean a possible supply shortfall, which were promptly lifted.
Revised:  A supplier, National Grid, issued two "balancing alerts", which mean a possible supply shortfall, which were promptly lifted.
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Original: The Department of Health in Northern Ireland have announced the death of an adult with the H1N1 swine flu virus.
Revised: The Department of Health in Northern Ireland announced the death of an adult with the H1N1 swine flu virus.
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Original: The Department of Health in Northern Ireland have announced the death of an adult with the H1N1 swine flu virus.
Revised: The Department of Health in Northern Ireland have announced the death of an adult with the H1N1 'swine flu' virus.
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