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Original:  The principles are stated to “ articulate the duties and obligations of States when engaging in Communications Surveillance ” .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Scope of Application, May 2014 In October 2013, The Principles were promoted in a brief filed before the President’s Review Group on Intelligence and Communications Technologies.
Revised:  The principles are stated to “ articulate the duties and obligations of States when engaging in Communications Surveillance " .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Scope of Application, May 2014 In October 2013, The Principles were promoted in a brief filed before the President’s Review Group on Intelligence and Communications Technologies.
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Original:  They claim that "In a world of ever more complex technology, it is increasingly unclear whether the distinction between “ meta-data ” and other information carries much URL
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Original:  They claim that "In a world of ever more complex technology, it is increasingly unclear whether the distinction between “ meta-data ” and other information carries much URL
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Original:  Once information collected by communications surveillance has been used for the purpose  which is was collected for, it should promptly be destroyed or returned.
Revised:  Once information collected by communications surveillance has been used for the purpose for which is was collected for, it should promptly be destroyed or returned.
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Original:  Once information collected by communications surveillance has been used for the purpose  which is was collected for, it should promptly be destroyed or returned.
Revised:  Once information collected by communications surveillance has been used for the purpose which is was collected it should be promptly destroyed or returned.
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Original: Public Oversight States should establish an independent position to oversee the use of Communications Surveillance , to ensure transparency and accountability.
Revised: Public Oversight States should establish an independent position to oversee the use of Communications Surveillance and to ensure transparency and accountability.
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Original:  This position would have sufficient authority to access all potentially relevant information ;
Revised:  The person(s) in this position would have sufficient authority to access all potentially relevant information ;
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Original:  This position would have sufficient authority to access all potentially relevant information ;
Revised:  This position would have sufficient authority to access all potentially relevant information ,
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Original:  to assess whether the State is making legitimate use of its lawful capabilities ;
Revised:  to assess whether the State is making legitimate use of its lawful capabilities ,
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Original:  to evaluate whether the State has met its transparency obligations  and to make public determinations as to the lawfulness of those actions.
Revised:  to evaluate whether the State has met its transparency obligations , and to make public determinations as to the lawfulness of those actions.
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Original:  The document in this instance makes reference to the United Kingdom's Interception of Communications Commissioner is an example of such an independent oversight mechanism.
Revised:  The document in this instance makes reference to the United Kingdom's Interception of Communications Commissioner as an example of such an independent oversight mechanism.
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Original:  Delay in notification is acceptable where ;
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Original:  notification would frustrate the purpose of communication surveillance , authorization is granted by a competent judicial authority.
Revised:  notification would frustrate the purpose of communication surveillance and authorization is granted by a competent judicial authority.
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Original:   Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Preface, May 2014 Communications Surveillance(Mass Surveillance of Communication) conflicts with a number of International Human Rights, mainly that of Privacy.
Revised:  International Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Preface, May 2014 Communications Surveillance(Mass Surveillance of Communication) conflicts with a number of International Human Rights, mainly that of Privacy.
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Original:   Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Insert, May 2014 The effect and intention of the principles remained the same, and the final and authoritative version of the document was then launched in May 2014.
Revised:  International Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Insert, May 2014 The effect and intention of the principles remained the same, and the final and authoritative version of the document was then launched in May 2014.
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Original:   Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance at Insert, May 2014 The following is a summary of the document containing the principles.
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Original:   Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, May 2014 The preamble of the document recognizes that Communications Surveillance interferes with the Right to privacy, therefore can only be used when it is prescribed by law, necessary to achieve a legitimate aim, and proportionate to the aim pursued.
Revised:  International Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, May 2014 The preamble of the document recognizes that Communications Surveillance interferes with the Right to privacy, therefore can only be used when it is prescribed by law, necessary to achieve a legitimate aim, and proportionate to the aim pursued.
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Original:   Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, Preamble, May 2014 It is to apply for protection of the individual from the state, and also states there is an obligation of states to protect individuals from non-state actors.
Revised:  International Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, Preamble, May 2014 It is to apply for protection of the individual from the state, and also states there is an obligation of states to protect individuals from non-state actors.
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Original:   Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Scope of Application, May 2014 The document states that unless the principles are applied this way, a State conducting Communications Surveillance may not meet International Human Rights obligations.
Revised:  International Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Scope of Application, May 2014 The document states that unless the principles are applied this way, a State conducting Communications Surveillance may not meet International Human Rights obligations.
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Original:   Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Scope of Application, May 2014 Necessity Surveillance laws should be limited to those which are necessary to achieve a legitimate aim, or where there are multiple means but Communications Surveillance is the least intrusive method on International Human Rights.
Revised:  International Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Scope of Application, May 2014 Necessity Surveillance laws should be limited to those which are necessary to achieve a legitimate aim, or where there are multiple means but Communications Surveillance is the least intrusive method on International Human Rights.
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Original:  The onus of establishing necessity should remain with the statePrinciples on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Principle of Necessity, May 2014
Revised:  The onus of establishing necessity should remain with the stateInternational Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Principle of Necessity, May 2014
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Original: UN Special Rapporteur on the Promotion and Protection of the Right to Freedom of Opinion and Expression, Frank La Rue, A/HRC/23/40, at para 10 Global consultation followed via conference calls every month between January and May URL The drafting process, led by Access Now, EFF and Privacy International, along with several NGO's, Criminal Lawyers, Human rights advocates and privacy advocates were finalized and published for the first time on 10 July 2013 online at 
Revised: UN Special Rapporteur on the Promotion and Protection of the Right to Freedom of Opinion and Expression, Frank La Rue, A/HRC/23/40, at para 10 Global consultation followed via conference calls every month between January and May 2013. The drafting process, led by Access Now, EFF and Privacy International, along with several NGO's, Criminal Lawyers, Human rights advocates and privacy advocates were finalized and published for the first time on 10 July 2013 online at 
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Original:  They claim that "In a world of ever more complex technology, it is increasingly unclear whether the distinction between "meta-data" and other information carries much URL
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Original: Books He is the author of several books :  Endless Cry in the Red Corridor , Mission Saranda: A War for Natural Resources in India  Whose country is it Anyway?
Revised: Books He is the author of several books : Endless Cry in the Red Corridor . Mission Saranda: A War for Natural Resources in India Whose country is it Anyway?
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Original: Books He is the author of several books :  Endless Cry in the Red Corridor , Mission Saranda: A War for Natural Resources in India  Whose country is it Anyway?
Revised: Books He is the author of several books : Endless Cry in the Red Corridor , Mission Saranda: A War for Natural Resources in India . Whose country is it Anyway?
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Original:  The books he has co-authored with others include: Vikas Ke Kabargah and Jharkhand main Asmita Sangharsh.
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Original:  The books he has co-authored with others include: Vikas Ke Kabargah and Jharkhand main Asmita Sangharsh.
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Original:  He has also written more than 500 articles focused on human rights issues, Adivasi rights, displacement, politics and social change published by edited books, daily newspapers, magazines, journals and news web portals.
Revised:  He has also written more than 500 articles focused on human rights issues, Adivasi rights, displacement, politics and social change published in edited books, daily newspapers, magazines, journals and news web portals.
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Original:  Arrested in late 1849, he stood trial at Sibiu, Bistrița  and Cluj.
Revised:  Arrested in late 1849, he stood trial at Sibiu, Bistrița , and Cluj.
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Original: Ioan Axente Sever Ioan Axente Sever (born Ioan Axente;
Revised: Ioan Axente SeverIoan Axente Sever (born Ioan Axente;
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Original: Ioan Axente SeverIoan Axente Sever (born Ioan Axente;
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Original:  Al Mahmud was considered as one of the greatest Bengali poets to have emerged in the 20th century.
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Original:  Celebrated by  Bengalis of all faiths, they include the Bengali New Year, Spring Festival, and Autumn Harvest Festival.
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Original:  An estimated 146million Bengali Muslims live in Bangladesh  , where Islam is the state religion and commands the demographic majority.
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Original:  The Bengali numerals are derived from ancient Indian mathematics, which also influenced the development of Arabic numerals and science in the medieval Islamic world.
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Original:  Their mausoleums are focal points for charity, religious congregations, and festivities .
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Original:  The Qadiri, Maizbhandaria, Naqshbandi, Chishti, Mujaddid, Ahmadi, Mohammadi, Soharwardi and Rifai orders are among the most widespread Sufi orders in the region .
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Original:  He will conduct a six-week tour in South Austraia before proceeding to New Guinea with his wife.
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Original: Agriculture 400px|Photo of the old chicken shed at Malahang Mission Station Photo of the old workshop In 1900 the Neuendettelsau Mission Society imported cattle from Australia to the mission stations at Malahang and Finschhafen however Tick fever caused many losses.
Revised: Agriculture 400px|Photo of the old chicken shed at Malahang Mission Station Photo of the old workshop In 1900 the Neuendettelsau Mission Society imported cattle from Australia to the mission stations at Malahang and Finschhafen however tick fever caused many losses.
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Original:  Hence, the term categorizes various forms of alternative media that are progressive, reformist , progressive, and post-materialistic.
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Original:  |240x240px More specifically, there have been several studies that have either been notable in that they have changed scientific understandings of animal personality or have applications in the field of human personality.
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Original:  In a meta-analysis of published, peer-reviewed repeatability estimates, reviewers found that, in general, approximately 35\% of behavioural variation among individuals could be attributed to individuals differences.
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Original:  The behavioural ecologist , Dr. Niels Dingemanse , illustrates that one could erroneously determine that variation in behaviour between individuals exists if the subjects have not been examined across a gradient of ecological contexts  and urges fellow researchers to apply behavioural reaction norms whenever possible.
Revised:  Behavioural ecologist Niels Dingemanse illustrates that one could erroneously determine that variation in behaviour between individuals exists if the subjects have not been examined across a gradient of ecological contexts and urges fellow researchers to apply behavioural reaction norms whenever possible.
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Original:  The behavioural ecologist , Dr. Niels Dingemanse , illustrates that one could erroneously determine that variation in behaviour between individuals exists if the subjects have not been examined across a gradient of ecological contexts  and urges fellow researchers to apply behavioural reaction norms whenever possible.
Revised:  The behavioural ecologist , Dr. Niels Dingemanse , illustrates that one could erroneously determine that variation in behaviour between individuals exists if the subjects have not been examined across a gradient of ecological contexts , and urges fellow researchers to apply behavioural reaction norms whenever possible.
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Original:  Reaching Lake Ngami on 29 April 1875, they demanded Van Zyl access to his wells, who initially refused.
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Original: File:Trekleier Gert Alberts.jpg|upGert Alberts, leader of the first Dorsland Trek Gert Andries Jacobus Alberts (born 3 January 1836 in Swellendam – died 29 March 1927 in Humpata) was the leader of the First Dorsland Trek.
Revised:  Gert Andries Jacobus Alberts (born 3 January 1836 in Swellendam – died 29 March 1927 in Humpata) was the leader of the First Dorsland Trek.
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Original: Biography Ana was born in Bucharest, in the Olarilor slumArina Avram, Femei celebre din România.
Revised: Biography Ana was born in Bucharest, in the Olarilor slum,Arina Avram, Femei celebre din România.
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Original:  Volumul II , in the family of a merchant, Atanasie Ghiulerasă, from the incipient bourgeoisie at the end of the Phanariot period.
Revised:  Volumul II in the family of a merchant, Atanasie Ghiulerasă, from the incipient bourgeoisie at the end of the Phanariot period.
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Original:  George Marcu (coord.), Dicţionarul personalităţilor feminine din România, Editura Meronia, Bucureşti , 2009, p. 140 Stan Stoica, Vasile Mărculeţ, George Marcu ş.a., Dicţionar biografic de istorie a României, Editura Meronia, Bucureşti , 2008, p. 291
Revised:  George Marcu (coord.), Dicţionarul personalităţilor feminine din România, Editura Meronia, București , 2009, p. 140 Stan Stoica, Vasile Mărculeţ, George Marcu ş.a., Dicţionar biografic de istorie a României, Editura Meronia, Bucureşti , 2008, p. 291
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Original:  George Marcu (coord.), Dicţionarul personalităţilor feminine din România, Editura Meronia, Bucureşti , 2009, p. 140 Stan Stoica, Vasile Mărculeţ, George Marcu ş.a., Dicţionar biografic de istorie a României, Editura Meronia, Bucureşti , 2008, p. 291
Revised:  George Marcu (coord.), Dicţionarul personalităţilor feminine din România, Editura Meronia, Bucureşti , 2009, p. 140 Stan Stoica, Vasile Mărculeţ, George Marcu ş.a., Dicţionar biografic de istorie a României, Editura Meronia, București , 2008, p. 291
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Original: Recent Exhibitions Everybody wants to be a catchy tune.
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Original: Annette Lemieux (born 1957 in Norfolk, Virginia) is an American artist who emerged in the early 1980s along with Tammi Smithgeneration to of “picture theory” artists (David Salle, Jack Goldstein, Cindy Sherman, Barbara Kruger, Richard Prince).
Revised: Annette Lemieux (born 1957 in Norfolk, Virginia) is an American artist who emerged in the early 1980s along with the “picture theory” artists (David Salle, Jack Goldstein, Cindy Sherman, Barbara Kruger, Richard Prince).
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Original: Harvard University faculty Category:University of Hartford alumni Category:Living people Category:American women artists Category:Postmodern artists Category:Censorship in the arts Category:Contemporary sculptors Category:American conceptual artists Category:Women conceptual artists Category:American contemporary artists Category:Sculptors from New York (state) Category:American women sculptors Category:American installation artists Category:21st-century  women artis
Revised: Harvard University faculty Category:University of Hartford alumni Category:Living people Category:American women artists Category:Postmodern artists Category:Censorship in the arts Category:Contemporary sculptors Category:American conceptual artists Category:Women conceptual artists Category:American contemporary artists Category:Sculptors from New York (state) Category:American women sculptors Category:American installation artists Category:21st-century American women artis
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Original: Harvard University faculty Category:University of Hartford alumni Category:Living people Category: American women artists Category: Postmodern artists Category:Censorship in the arts Category:Contemporary sculptors Category:American conceptual artists Category:Women conceptual artists Category:American contemporary artists Category:Sculptors from New York (state) Category:American women sculptors Category:American installation artists Category:21st-century American women artis
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Original: Lemieux has also revised her works as the Global Correspondent reported, "The Day after the election last November, Lemieux e-emaile the Whitney Museum of America Art and instructed them to upend her piece 'Left Right Left Right."
Revised: Lemieux has also revised her works as the Global Correspondent reported, "The Day after the election last November, Lemieux e-emailed the Whitney Museum of America Art and instructed them to upend her piece 'Left Right Left Right."
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Original: Lemieux is represented by Elizabeth Dee Gallery in New York.
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Original:  As Lemieux remarked that she created the piece in a time of optimism and felt that the piece needed reflect the time rather than a past moment   .
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Original: [[File:Relatives Chart.svg|American kinship]] [[File:Huli wigman.jpg|upHuli Wigman from the Southern Highlands]] File:CowHA.jpg|upIn Hinduism, the cow is a symbol of wealth, strength, and selfless giving.
Revised: [[File:Relatives Chart.svg|American kinship]] [[File:Huli wigman.jpg|upHuli Wigman from the Southern Highlands]] 
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Original:  For example, the English language is spoken differently in the USA , the UK and Australia, and even within English-speaking countries there are hundreds of dialects of English that each signals a belonging to a particular region and/or subculture.
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Original:   Townsend and his fellow visual effects artists are nominated for an Academy Award for Best Visual Effects for the 2013 film Iron Man 3.
Revised:  Townsend and his fellow visual effects artists was nominated for an Academy Award for Best Visual Effects for the 2013 film Iron Man 3.
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