wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Officials in the resort island of Hainan have suspended train services in and out of the island and have also brought 2500 fishing boats back to the harbor.
Revised: Officials in the resort island of Hainan have suspended train services in and out of the island and brought 2500 fishing boats back to the harbor.
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Original: FILE: A member United States Navy receiving a vaccination Ten infants have died and nearly 6000 people have been infected with Whooping Cough (Pertussis) since the beginning of the year.
Revised: FILE: A member United States Navy receiving a vaccination Ten infants have died and nearly 6,000 others have been infected with Whooping Cough (Pertussis) since the beginning of the year.
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Original: FILE: A member United States Navy receiving a vaccination Ten infants have died and nearly 6000 people have been infected with Whooping Cough (Pertussis) since the beginning of the year.
Revised: FILE: A member United States Navy receiving a vaccination Ten infants have died and nearly 6000 people have been infected with whooping cough, or pertussis, since the beginning of the year.
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Original: FILE: A member United States Navy receiving a vaccination Ten infants have died and nearly 6000 people have been infected with Whooping Cough (Pertussis) since the beginning of the year.
Revised: FILE: A member United States Navy receiving a vaccination Ten infants have died and nearly 6000 people have been infected with Whooping Cough (Pertussis) since the beginning of this year.
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Original:  A spokesman from the California Department of Public Health, Michael Sicilia, told CNN news that all of the deaths occurred in infants under three months and that nine of the deaths were found in infants under eight weeks old.
Revised:  A spokesman from the California Department of Public Health, Michael Sicilia, says all of the deaths occurred in infants under three months and that nine of the deaths were found in infants under eight weeks old.
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Original:  Pertussis also carries side effects, such as a 20 \% chance of pneumonia and about a 1\% chance of convulsions, which makes it very deadly to infants.
Revised:  Pertussis also carries side effects, such as a 20 percent chance of pneumonia and about a 1\% chance of convulsions, which makes it very deadly to infants.
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Original:  Pertussis also carries side effects, such as a 20 \% chance of pneumonia and about a 1\% chance of convulsions, which makes it very deadly to infants.
Revised:  Pertussis also carries side effects, such as a 20 \% chance of pneumonia and about a one percent chance of convulsions, which makes it very deadly to infants.
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Original:  Alison Patti also said that the "whooping" characteristic is absent in adults which makes them think they don't have Pertussis .
Revised:  Alison Patti also said that the "whooping" characteristic is absent in adults which makes them think they don't have pertussis .
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Original:  This indicates that the children were too young to receive the vaccine for the disease.
Revised:  This leads to the conclusion that the children were too young to receive the vaccine for the disease.
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Original:  Sicilia also indicated that an estimated 50\% of children received the disease from parents or caregivers.
Revised:  Sicilia indicated that an estimated 50\% of children received the disease from parents or caregivers.
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Original:  However, some parents are refusing to have their children vaccinated against the disease and the vaccine has worn off in some adults.
Revised:  Some parents are refusing to have their children vaccinated against the disease and the vaccine has worn off in some adults.
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Original:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Center for Disease Control (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect you forever and health officials are urging that you get the vaccine again if you haven't received it within the past five years.
Revised:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Center for Disease Control (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect individuals indefinitely and health officials are urging that you get the vaccine again if you haven't received it within the past five years.
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Original:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Center for Disease Control (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect you forever and health officials are urging that you get the vaccine again if you haven't received it within the past five years.
Revised:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Center for Disease Control (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect you forever and health officials are urging that people get the vaccine again if you haven't received it within the past five years.
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Original:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Center for Disease Control (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect you forever and health officials are urging that you get the vaccine again if you haven't received it within the past five years.
Revised:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Center for Disease Control (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect you forever and health officials are urging that you get the vaccine again if they have not received it within the past five years.
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Original:  According to the CDC  for the first week or two the symptoms of the cough are similar to the common cold , however soon after the child begins to "cough violently and rapidly, over and over, until the air is gone from their lungs and they're forced to inhale with a loud "whooping" sound."
Revised:  According to the CDC , for the first week or two the symptoms of the cough are similar to the common cold , however soon after the child begins to "cough violently and rapidly, over and over, until the air is gone from their lungs and they're forced to inhale with a loud "whooping" sound."
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Original:  According to the CDC  for the first week or two the symptoms of the cough are similar to the common cold , however soon after the child begins to "cough violently and rapidly, over and over, until the air is gone from their lungs and they're forced to inhale with a loud "whooping" sound."
Revised:  According to the CDC for the first week or two the symptoms of the cough are similar to the common cold ; soon after the child begins to "cough violently and rapidly, over and over, until the air is gone from their lungs and they're forced to inhale with a loud "whooping" sound."
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Original:  According to the CDC  for the first week or two the symptoms of the cough are similar to the common cold , however soon after the child begins to "cough violently and rapidly, over and over, until the air is gone from their lungs and they're forced to inhale with a loud "whooping" sound."
Revised:  According to the CDC for the first week or two the symptoms of the cough are similar to the common cold , however soon after the child begins to "cough violently and rapidly, over and over, until the air is gone from their lungs and they're forced to inhale with a loud 'whooping' sound."
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Original:  Pertussis also carries side effects, such as a 20 percent chance of pneumonia and about a one percent chance of convulsions, which makes it very deadly to infants.
Revised:  Pertussis carries side effects, such as a 20 percent chance of pneumonia and about a one percent chance of convulsions, which makes it very deadly to infants.
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Original:  Alison Patti also said that the "whooping" characteristic is absent in adults which makes them think they don't have pertussis.
Revised:  Alison Patti said that the "whooping" characteristic is absent in adults which makes them think they don't have pertussis.
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Original: Photo photo of a member  United States Navy receiving a vaccination.
Revised: Photo photo of a member of the United States Navy receiving a vaccination.
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Original: Photo photo of a member of the United States Navy receiving a vaccination .
Revised: File photo of a member of the United States Navy receiving a vaccination .
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Original:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Center for Disease Control  (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect individuals indefinitely and health officials are urging that people get the vaccine again if they have not received it within the past five years.
Revised:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Centers for Disease Control (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect individuals indefinitely and health officials are urging that people get the vaccine again if they have not received it within the past five years.
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Original:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Center for Disease Control  (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect individuals indefinitely and health officials are urging that people get the vaccine again if they have not received it within the past five years.
Revised:  Alison Patti, a spokesperson from the Center for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC), pointed out that the vaccine does not protect individuals indefinitely and health officials are urging that people get the vaccine again if they have not received it within the past five years.
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Original:  They should take into consideration the Charity Commission's rulings when weighing up whether to do so  I do not believe the majority of the public would want their own council to be giving special tax breaks to such a controversial organisation  "
Revised:  They should take into consideration the Charity Commission's rulings when weighing up whether to do so . I do not believe the majority of the public would want their own council to be giving special tax breaks to such a controversial organisation "
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Original:  They should take into consideration the Charity Commission's rulings when weighing up whether to do so  I do not believe the majority of the public would want their own council to be giving special tax breaks to such a controversial organisation  "
Revised:  They should take into consideration the Charity Commission's rulings when weighing up whether to do so I do not believe the majority of the public would want their own council to be giving special tax breaks to such a controversial organisation . "
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Original: In response to The Guardian 's report, Eric Pickles issued a statement saying that Scientology should not receive privileged tax status and did not deserve to do so : "Tolerance and freedom of expression are important British values, but this does not mean that the likes of Church of Scientology deserve favoured tax treatment over and above other business premises.
Revised: In response to The Guardian report, Eric Pickles issued a statement saying that Scientology should not receive privileged tax status and did not deserve to do so : "Tolerance and freedom of expression are important British values, but this does not mean that the likes of Church of Scientology deserve favoured tax treatment over and above other business premises.
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Original: In response to The Guardian 's report, Eric Pickles issued a statement saying that Scientology should not receive privileged tax status and did not deserve to do so : "Tolerance and freedom of expression are important British values, but this does not mean that the likes of Church of Scientology deserve favoured tax treatment over and above other business premises.
Revised: In response to The Guardian 's report, Eric Pickles issued a statement saying that Scientology should not receive privileged tax status and did not deserve to do so , "Tolerance and freedom of expression are important British values, but this does not mean that the likes of Church of Scientology deserve favoured tax treatment over and above other business premises.
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Original:  A spokesman for the Church of Scientology told The Guardian : "Scientology is very popular with those who have visited our churches, met with Scientologists and observed or utilised our numerous community activities that effectively address drug abuse, illiteracy, declining moral values, human rights violations, criminality and more.
Revised:  A spokesman for the Church of Scientology told The Guardian , "Scientology is very popular with those who have visited our churches, met with Scientologists and observed or utilised our numerous community activities that effectively address drug abuse, illiteracy, declining moral values, human rights violations, criminality and more.
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Original:  Birmingham City Council told the local Sunday Mercury newspaper : "We have noted Mr Pickles' comments and will take them on board."
Revised:  Birmingham City Council told the local Sunday Mercury newspaper , "We have noted Mr Pickles' comments and will take them on board."
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Original:  Pickles commented : "I do not believe the majority of the public would want their own council to be giving special tax breaks to such a controversial organisation."
Revised:  Pickles commented , "I do not believe the majority of the public would want their own council to be giving special tax breaks to such a controversial organisation."
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Original:  The Pacific Gas and Electric Company (PG&E) is facing several lawsuits  including one filed by residents of San Bruno, California after a gas line exploded in their neighborhood on September 10, completely destroying over 50 structures, 37 of them homes.
Revised:  The Pacific Gas and Electric Company (PG&E) is facing several lawsuits , including one filed by residents of San Bruno, California after a gas line exploded in their neighborhood on September 10, completely destroying over 50 structures, 37 of them homes.
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Original:  According to the lawsuitfiled by residents, PG&E knew the pipeline was faulty and that it could fail.
Revised:  In their lawsuit, residents claim that PG&E knew the pipeline was faulty and that it could fail.
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Original:  Reports say that days earlier,several wrongful death lawsuits were also filed against PG&E.
Revised:  "This wasn't an accident. This was a foreseeable consequence of ignoring safety measures," one attorney representing the families said. It has also been reported that several other wrongful death lawsuits were also filed against PG&E.
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Original:  Reports say that days earlier,several wrongful death lawsuits were also filed against PG&E.
Revised:  Reports say that days earlier,several wrongful death lawsuits have been filed against PG&E.
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Original:   PG&E has not yet commented on the legal complaints.
Revised:  "We want our neighborhood rebuilt, and we want our people back," he said. A PG&E has not yet commented on the legal complaints.
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Original:  They further allege that PG E were aware that the pipeline could fail, but did not act.
Revised:  They further allege that E were aware that the pipeline could fail, but did not act.
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Original:  Burials at the former leprosy hospital in England's former capital city have been radio carbon dated and date from AD 960-1030.
Revised:  Burials at the former leprosy hospital in England's former capital city have been radio carbon dated and are estimated to be from AD 960-1030.
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Original:  The Winchester dig has been taking place in Hospital Field, the location of the former St  Mary Magdalen Hospital which was believed to have been established in AD 1170.
Revised:  The Winchester dig has been taking place in Hospital Field, the location of the former St . Mary Magdalen Hospital which was believed to have been established in AD 1170.
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Original:  Before the match , Madrid had an estimated chance of roughly 11\% of winning the league title , while the Catalans needed one victory to ensure the cup .
Revised:  A victory in this match ensured the title for Barcelona .
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Original: Location of the esrthquake A strong 6.7 earthquake epicentered in the Gulf of California, 105 km (65 miles) south of Los Mochis, Sinaloa, rocked western Mexico today at 11:53 a.m (1753 UTC) local time , according to the United States Geological Survey (USGS).
Revised: Location of the esrthquake A magnitude 6.7 earthquake epicentered in the Gulf of California, 105 km (65 miles) south of Los Mochis, Sinaloa, rocked western Mexico today at 11:53 a.m (1753 UTC) local time , according to the United States Geological Survey (USGS).
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Original: Location of the esrthquake A strong 6.7 earthquake epicentered in the Gulf of California, 105 km (65 miles) south of Los Mochis, Sinaloa, rocked western Mexico today at 11:53 a.m (1753 UTC) local time , according to the United States Geological Survey (USGS).
Revised: Location of the esrthquake A strong 6.7 earthquake struck western Mexico today at 11:53 a.m (1753 UTC) local time , according to the United States Geological Survey (USGS).
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Original: Location of the esrthquake A strong 6.7 earthquake epicentered in the Gulf of California, 105 km (65 miles) south of Los Mochis, Sinaloa, rocked western Mexico today at 11:53 a.m (1753 UTC) local time , according to the United States Geological Survey (USGS).
Revised: Location of the esrthquake A strong 6.7 earthquake epicentered in the Gulf of California, 105 km (65 miles) south of Los Mochis, Sinaloa, rocked western Mexico today at 11:53 a.m . (17:53 UTC) local time , according to the United States Geological Survey (USGS).
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Original:   The powerful earthquake caused residents of Sinaloa to panic and run into the street.
Revised:  The earthquake caused residents of Sinaloa to panic and run into the street.
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Original:  The USGS initially reported the quake as a 6.9, but later revised it to 6.7 on the moment magnitude scale .
Revised:  The USGS initially reported the quake as a 6.9, but later revised it to 6.7 .
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Original:  There were no immediate reports of damages or deaths .
Revised:  There were no reports of damages or deaths .
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Original:  There were no immediate reports of damages or deaths .
Revised:  There were no immediate reports of damages or injuries .
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Original: Most of the reported cases are to the north of the earthquake ravaged capital, Port-Au-Prince, but officials fear that it could spread to the capital  .
Revised: Most of the reported cases are to the north of the earthquake ravaged capital, Port-Au-Prince, but officials fear that it could spread to the capital city .
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Original: Most of the reported cases are to the north of the earthquake ravaged capital, Port-Au-Prince , but officials fear that it could spread to the capital city  .
Revised: A majority of the reported cases are to the north of the earthquake ravaged capital, Port-Au-Prince , but officials fear that it could spread to the capital city .
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Original: Most of the reported cases are to the north of the earthquake ravaged capital, Port-Au-Prince , but officials fear that it could spread to the capital city  .
Revised: Most of the reported cases are to the north of the earthquake ravaged capital, Port-Au-Prince . Officials fear that the disease could spread to the capital city .
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Original:  According to the CDC  cholera is "an acute, diarrheal illness caused by infection of the intestine with the bacterium Vibrio cholerae  " , they also said "Approximately one in 20 infected persons has severe disease characterized by profuse watery diarrhea, vomiting, and leg cramps.
Revised:  According to the CDC , cholera is "an acute, diarrheal illness caused by infection of the intestine with the bacterium Vibrio cholerae " , they also said "Approximately one in 20 infected persons has severe disease characterized by profuse watery diarrhea, vomiting, and leg cramps.
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Original:  According to the CDC  cholera is "an acute, diarrheal illness caused by infection of the intestine with the bacterium Vibrio cholerae  " , they also said "Approximately one in 20 infected persons has severe disease characterized by profuse watery diarrhea, vomiting, and leg cramps.
Revised:  According to the CDC cholera is "an acute, diarrheal illness caused by infection of the intestine with the bacterium Vibrio cholerae . " , they also said "Approximately one in 20 infected persons has severe disease characterized by profuse watery diarrhea, vomiting, and leg cramps.
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Original:  According to the CDC  cholera is "an acute, diarrheal illness caused by infection of the intestine with the bacterium Vibrio cholerae  " , they also said "Approximately one in 20 infected persons has severe disease characterized by profuse watery diarrhea, vomiting, and leg cramps.
Revised:  According to the CDC cholera is "an acute, diarrheal illness caused by infection of the intestine with the bacterium Vibrio cholerae " They also said that "Approximately one in 20 infected persons has severe disease characterized by profuse watery diarrhea, vomiting, and leg cramps.
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Original: Richard has already caused widespread flooding across western parishes of Jamaica, which are currently under a flash flood warning.
Revised: Richard has already caused widespread flooding across western parishes of Jamaica, which is currently under a flash flood warning.
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Original:  A tropical storm warning and a hurricane watch are in effect for the north coast of Honduras from the Nicaragua/Honduras border westward to Limón  . Richard is not expected to be a threat to oil rigs in the Gulf of Mexico
Revised:  A tropical storm warning are in effect for the north coast of Honduras from the Nicaragua/Honduras border westward to Limón . Richard is not expected to be a threat to oil rigs in the Gulf of Mexico
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Original: File:Tropical Storm Richard (2010) October 22.jpg| Satellite image of Tropical Storm Richard on October 22 approaching Honduras Tropical Storm Richard formed in the western Caribbean Thursday and is currently moving slowly westward towards Honduras.
Revised:  Satellite image of Tropical Storm Richard on October 22 approaching Honduras Tropical Storm Richard formed in the western Caribbean Thursday and is currently moving slowly westward towards Honduras.
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Original: The war logs describe scenes of torture and abuse asserted to have been committed by Iraqi security forces .
Revised: The war logs describe scenes of torture and abuse asserted to have been committed by Iraqi security forces 
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Original:  Furthermore, according to various secondary sources, archives show that Iran, also, was involved in the war, as reinforce of Shiite militias
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Original:  The warning gives officials the power to evacuate areas six hours before impact, close schools, airports and recall vessels in danger back to port  
Revised:  The warning gives officials the power to evacuate areas six hours before impact, close schools, airports and recall vessels in danger back to port . 
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Original: Projected path of Megi Typhoon Megi passed by Taiwan devastating the island, killing seven and trapping 400 in automobiles.
Revised: Projected path of Megi passed by Taiwan devastating the island, killing seven and trapping 400 in automobiles.
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Original:  Megi is currently heading northwards and is expected to make landfall in Mainland China by 0600 UTC today.
Revised:  Megi is currently heading northwards and is expected to make landfall in Mainland China by 0600 today.
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Original:  The village of Espinillo was badly damaged, and approximately 600 people were left homeless by the earthquake, Teletrece reported on March 16.
Revised:  The village of Espinillo was badly damaged, and approximately 600 people were made homeless by the earthquake, Teletrece reported on March 16.
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