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Original:  However, the bad news from ADP has prompted some to think that the current forecasts are too optimistic . "Despite some recent indications that stock prices, consumer spending, and housing activity may be bottoming out, employment, which usually trails overall economic activity, is likely to remain very weak for at least several more months.
Revised:  However, the bad news from ADP has prompted some to think that the current forecasts are too optimistic "Despite some recent indications that stock prices, consumer spending, and housing activity may be bottoming out, employment, which usually trails overall economic activity, is likely to remain very weak for at least several more months.
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Original:  However, the bad news from ADP has prompted some to think that the current forecasts are too optimistic . "Despite some recent indications that stock prices, consumer spending, and housing activity may be bottoming out, employment, which usually trails overall economic activity, is likely to remain very weak for at least several more months.
Revised:  However, the bad news from ADP has prompted some to think that the current forecasts are too optimistic . 
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Original: “ The sharp employment declines among medium- and small-size businesses indicate that the recession continues to spread aggressively beyond manufacturing and housing-related activities to almost every area of the economy," said Joel Prakken, the chairman of the company that conducts the ADP survey, Macroeconomic Advisors LLC.
Revised: " The sharp employment declines among medium- and small-size businesses indicate that the recession continues to spread aggressively beyond manufacturing and housing-related activities to almost every area of the economy," said Joel Prakken, the chairman of the company that conducts the ADP survey, Macroeconomic Advisors LLC.
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Original:  "Despite some recent indications that stock prices, consumer spending, and housing activity may be bottoming out, employment, which usually trails overall economic activity, is likely to remain very weak for at least several more months . " 
Revised:  "Despite some recent indications that stock prices, consumer spending, and housing activity may be bottoming out, employment, which usually trails overall economic activity, is likely to remain very weak for at least several more months , " 
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Original:  Analysts predicted that the department will announce the employment rate increased to 8.5 with 660,000 jobs axed in March.
Revised:  Analysts predicted that the department will announce the employment rate increased to 8.5 with 660,000 jobs eliminated in March.
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Original:  Analysts predicted that the department will announce the employment rate increased to 8.5  with 660,000 jobs eliminated in March.
Revised:  Analysts predicted that the department will announce the employment rate increased to 8.5 \% with 660,000 jobs eliminated in March.
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Original: A  jogger asked construction workers for help after spotting a coyote in down town Sarnia and hearing it bark.
Revised: A startled jogger asked construction workers for help after spotting a coyote in down town Sarnia and hearing it bark.
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Original:  Maybe they look too real . ” said Terry McCallum, Sarnia’s director of community services, “'We just figured vandals took them.
Revised:  Maybe they look too real ” said Terry McCallum, Sarnia’s director of community services, “'We just figured vandals took them.
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Original: A startled jogger asked construction workers for help after spotting a coyote in down town Sarnia and hearing it bark.
Revised: A startled jogger asked construction workers for help after spotting a coyote in downtown w:Sarnia, Ontario and hearing it bark.
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Original:  It was then that it was discovered that the coyote was a cardboard cutout of a coyote placed in the park to ward of Canada geese.
Revised:  It was then that it was discovered that the coyote was a cardboard cutout of a coyote placed in the park to ward off Canada geese.
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Original:  Maybe they look too real” said Terry McCallum, Sarnia’s director of community services, “ ' We just figured vandals took them.
Revised:  Maybe they look too real” said Terry McCallum, Sarnia’s director of community services, “ We just figured vandals took them.
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Original: A startled jogger asked construction workers for help after spotting a coyote in downtown w:Sarnia , Ontario and hearing it bark.
Revised: A startled jogger asked construction workers for help after spotting a coyote in downtown Sarnia and hearing it bark.
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Original: The General Motors Corporation  announced on Wednesday that it saw a 45\% drop in United States vehicle sales for its cars in March.
Revised: The General Motors Corporation (GM) announced on Wednesday that it saw a 45\% drop in United States vehicle sales for its cars in March.
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Original:    Other automobile manufacturers also saw their car sales slip: Toyota from Japan and Chrysler LLC both reported a 39\% loss, whilst Ford Motor Company sales fell 41\%. 
Revised:  Other automobile manufacturers also saw their car sales slip: Toyota from Japan and Chrysler both reported a 39\% loss, whilst Ford Motor Company sales fell 41\%. 
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Original:  The typical incentive programs simply do not resonate in today's economy," Jesse Toprak, an analyst for Edmunds  
Revised:  The typical incentive programs simply do not resonate in today's economy," Jesse Toprak, an analyst for Edmunds . 
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Original: Other automobile manufacturers also saw their car sales slip: Toyota from Japan and Chrysler both reported a 39\% loss, whilst Ford Motor Company sales fell 41\%.
Revised: Other automobile manufacturers also saw their car sales slip: Chrysler and the Japanese Toyota both reported a 39\% loss, whilst Ford Motor Company sales fell 41\%.
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Original:  Ford shares gained 2.3\% to a level of US $2.69 in early trading at US stock markets today, while stocks for Toyota's US depository increased 5.9\% to $ 67. GM shares slipped 1.6\% down to $1.92
Revised:  Ford shares gained 2.3\% to a level of US $2.69 in early trading at US stock markets on Wednesday, while stocks for Toyota's US depository increased 5.9\% to $ 67. GM shares slipped 1.6\% down to $1.92
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Original:  According to reports, the incident occurred at Geita , Mwanza region on Sunday, when the 100-metre-deep shaft the miners were working in collapsed after being flooded by heavy seasonal rains.
Revised:  According to reports, the incident occurred at Geita region when the 100-metre-deep shaft the miners were working in collapsed after being flooded by heavy seasonal rains.
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Original:  The African also said that witness repors say a dozen of the bodies had already been identified.
Revised:  The African also said reported that a dozen of the bodies had already been identified.
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Original:  The African also said that witness repors say a dozen of the bodies had already been identified.
Revised:  The African also said that witness repors say a dozen of the bodies of the victims have already been identified.
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Original:  The African also said reported that a dozen of the bodies of the victims have already been identified.
Revised:  The African also reported that a dozen of the bodies of the victims have already been identified.
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Original:  CBS, the network which airs the serial drama in the United States, has announced its cancellation after 72 years  .
Revised:  CBS, the network which airs the serial drama in the United States, has announced its cancellation after 72 years on the air .
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Original:  CBS, the network which airs the serial drama in the United States, has announced its cancellation after 72 years on the air .
Revised:  CBS, the network which airs the serial drama in the United States, has announced its cancellation after 72 years .
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Original:  In an effort to save costs last year, Procter and Gamble Productions, the company in charge of production, instituted cost-saving measures which included scrapping more expensive set designs and getting rid of the industry standard three-camera taping technique, replacing them with portable cameras.
Revised:  In an effort to save costs last year, Procter Gamble Productions, the company in charge of production, instituted cost-saving measures which included scrapping more expensive set designs and getting rid of the industry standard three-camera taping technique, replacing them with portable cameras.
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Original:  Procter Gamble , while parting ways with CBS, are not ruling out a cost-effective way to keep the show afloat either as an online venture or on another television channel.
Revised:  Gamble , while parting ways with CBS, are not ruling out a cost-effective way to keep the show afloat either as an online venture or on another television channel.
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Original:  In an effort to save costs last year, Procter & Gamble Productions, the company  in charge of production, instituted cost-saving measures which included scrapping more expensive set designs and getting rid of the industry standard three-camera taping technique, replacing them with portable cameras.
Revised:  In an effort to save costs last year, Procter & Gamble Productions, the company formerly in charge of production, instituted cost-saving measures which included scrapping more expensive set designs and getting rid of the industry standard three-camera taping technique, replacing them with portable cameras.
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Original:  They stated that their price of US$ 4.00, helps to ease the economic pinch.
Revised:  They stated that their price of US$ 4 helps to ease the economic pinch.
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Original:  Quiznos restaurant chain, a chain that specializes in selliing submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial gay themed television commercial, with the uncut version only appearing in the late-night commercial lineup .
Revised:  Quiznos restaurant chain, a chain that specializes in selliing submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial television commercial, with the uncut version only appearing in the late-night commercial lineup .
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Original:  Quiznos restaurant chain, a chain that specializes in selliing submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial gay themed television commercial, with the uncut version only appearing in the late-night commercial lineup .
Revised:  Quiznos restaurant chain, a chain that specializes in selliing submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial gay themed television commercial, with an uncut version only appearing in the late-night commercial lineup .
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Original:  Quiznos restaurant chain, a chain that specializes in selliing submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial gay themed television commercial, with the uncut version only appearing in the late-night commercial lineup .
Revised:  Quiznos restaurant chain, a chain that specializes in selliing submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial gay themed television commercial, with the uncut version only appearing in the late-night lineups .
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Original:  Quiznos restaurant chain, a chain that specializes in selliing submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial television commercial, with an uncut version only appearing in the late-night lineups.
Revised:  Quiznos restaurant chain, a chain that specializes in selling submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial television commercial, with an uncut version only appearing in the late-night lineups.
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Original:  Quiznos restaurant chain, a chain that specializes in selling submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial television commercial, with an extended version only appearing in the late-night lineups.
Revised:  Quiznos , a fast food restaurant chain that specializes in selling submarine sandwiches, has aired a controversial television commercial, with an extended version only appearing in the late-night lineups.
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Original:  Later in the commercial, the toaster asks Scott to make one of the sandwiches and say the price of it  "sexy"  then "sexier."
Revised:  Later in the commercial, the toaster asks Scott to make one of the sandwiches and says the price of it "sexy" then "sexier."
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Original:  Later in the commercial, the toaster asks Scott to make one of the sandwiches and say the price of it  "sexy"  then "sexier."
Revised:  Later in the commercial, the toaster asks Scott to make one of the sandwiches and say the price of it is "sexy" then "sexier."
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Original:  Later in the commercial, the toaster asks Scott to make one of the sandwiches and say the price of it  "sexy"  then "sexier."
Revised:  Later in the commercial, the toaster asks Scott to make one of the sandwiches and say the price of it "sexy" and then "sexier."
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Original:  One website TVSquad.com, one of the internet 's top television weblog, compares the commercial to a pornography film.
Revised:  One website TVSquad.com, one of the Internet 's top television weblog, compares the commercial to a pornography film.
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Original:  One website TVSquad.com, one of the internet 's top television weblog, compares the commercial to a pornography film.
Revised:  One website TVSquad.com, one of the internet 's top television weblogs, compared the commercial to a pornography film.
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Original:  "The new Quizno's commercial is probably the closest we'll get to a gay porn flick in a mainstream sub shop ad," wrote Bob Sassone on TVSquad .
Revised:  "The new Quizno's commercial is probably the closest we'll get to a gay porn flick in a mainstream sub shop ad," Sassone wrote .
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Original:  In 2007  the company made another controversial commercial.
Revised:  In 2007 , the company made another controversial commercial.
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Original:  The commercial is a promotion for the company's new sandwich, the 'Toasty Torpedo' and Bob Sassone, a writer for TVSquad.com  argues that it is homosexually themed and compare it to pornography.
Revised:  The commercial is a promotion for the company's new sandwich, the 'Toasty Torpedo' . Bob Sassone, a writer for TVSquad.com argues that it is homosexually themed and compare it to pornography.
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Original:  The commercial is a promotion for the company's new sandwich, the 'Toasty Torpedo' and Bob Sassone, a writer for TVSquad.com  argues that it is homosexually themed and compare it to pornography.
Revised:  The commercial is a promotion for the company's new sandwich, the 'Toasty Torpedo' and Bob Sassone, a writer for TVSquad.com , argues that it is homosexually themed and compare it to pornography.
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Original:  The commercial is a promotion for the company's new sandwich, the 'Toasty Torpedo' and Bob Sassone, a writer for TVSquad.com  argues that it is homosexually themed and compare it to pornography.
Revised:  The commercial is a promotion for the company's new sandwich, the 'Toasty Torpedo' and Bob Sassone, a writer for TVSquad.com argues that it is homosexually themed and compares it to pornography.
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Original:  Ireland  France and the United States celebrate April Fool all day, whereas a few countries celebrate jokes only until noon such as the United Kingdom, Australia, New Zealand, Canada and South Africa.
Revised:  Ireland , France and the United States celebrate April Fool all day, whereas a few countries celebrate jokes only until noon such as the United Kingdom, Australia, New Zealand, Canada and South Africa.
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Original:  There are press releases about this short lived prank which received controverial feedback.
Revised:  There are press releases about this short lived prank which received controversial feedback.
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Original:  The Swiss Tourism Board has announced that volunteers were desperately needed, The Association of Mountain Cleaners “ makes sure that our holiday guests can always enjoy perfect mountains.
Revised:  The Swiss Tourism Board has announced that volunteers were desperately needed, The Association of Mountain Cleaners " makes sure that our holiday guests can always enjoy perfect mountains.
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Original:  The Guardian Proposed its move to Twitter, which will allow this newspaper to fit its article content into 140 character messages or “tweets”.
Revised:  The Guardian proposed its move to Twitter, which will allow this newspaper to fit its article content into 140 character messages or “tweets”.
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Original:  The Guardian Proposed its move to Twitter, which will allow this newspaper to fit its article content into 140 character messages or “tweets”.
Revised:  The Guardian Proposed its move to Twitter, which would allow the newspaper to fit its article content into 140 character messages or “tweets”.
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Original:  Boring day otherwise *sigh*" Wikipedia even fooled Fox news who claimed that "every item on the home page of the user-generated site Wikipedia is fake.
Revised:  Boring day otherwise *sigh*" Wikipedia even fooled Fox News by claiming that "every item on the home page of the user-generated site Wikipedia is fake.
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Original:  The featured wikipedia article regaled the "Museum of Bad Art" in Boston."
Revised:  The featured Wikipedia article regaled the "Museum of Bad Art" in Boston."
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Original:  However  each item on the main page was based on realty.
Revised:  However , each item on the main page was based on realty.
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Original:   Conficker Internet worm had been in the news warning of a worst case scenario when computers worldwide would be affected by the virus.
Revised:  The Conficker Internet worm had been in the news warning of a worst case scenario when computers worldwide would be affected by the virus.
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Original:  Qualcomm ingeniously revealed a new wirenless networking technology called wireless convergence.
Revised:  Qualcomm ingeniously revealed a new wireless networking technology called wireless convergence.
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Original:  Gaming websites across the internet Blizzard, Joystiq and its affiliates posted reviews and announcements of games with tongue in cheek.
Revised:  Gaming websites across the internet Blizzard, Joystiq and affiliates posted reviews and announcements of games with tongue in cheek.
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Original:  In Ireland  U2 fans received a U2opia concert on a shopping centre roof top concert rather than the real thing.
Revised:  In Ireland , U2 fans received a U2opia concert on a shopping centre roof top concert rather than the real thing.
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Original:  However, each item on the main page was based on realty .
Revised:  However, each item on the main page was based on reality .
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Original:  Media outlets , and internet sites have joined family, office workers  and friends to provide a wide variety of practical jokes.
Revised:  Media outlets and internet sites have joined family, office workers and friends to provide a wide variety of practical jokes.
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Original:  Media outlets , and internet sites have joined family, office workers  and friends to provide a wide variety of practical jokes.
Revised:  Media outlets , and internet sites have joined family, office workers , and friends to provide a wide variety of practical jokes.
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Original:  Ireland, France  and the United States celebrate April Fool all day, whereas a few countries celebrate jokes only until noon such as the United Kingdom, Australia, New Zealand, Canada  and South Africa.
Revised:  Ireland, France , and the United States celebrate April Fool all day, whereas a few countries celebrate jokes only until noon such as the United Kingdom, Australia, New Zealand, Canada and South Africa.
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Original:  Ireland, France  and the United States celebrate April Fool all day, whereas a few countries celebrate jokes only until noon such as the United Kingdom, Australia, New Zealand, Canada  and South Africa.
Revised:  Ireland, France and the United States celebrate April Fools all day, whereas a few countries celebrate jokes only until noon such as the United Kingdom, Australia, New Zealand, Canada and South Africa.
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Original:  Ireland, France  and the United States celebrate April Fool all day, whereas a few countries celebrate jokes only until noon such as the United Kingdom, Australia, New Zealand, Canada  and South Africa.
Revised:  Ireland, France and the United States celebrate April Fool all day, whereas a few countries celebrate jokes only until noon such as the United Kingdom, Australia, New Zealand, Canada , and South Africa.
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Original:  There are press releases about this short lived prank which received controversial feedback.
Revised:  There are press releases about this short-lived prank which received controversial feedback.
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Original:  Experts just knew that it was set to go off on April 1. Several anomalous happenings were attributed to Conficker including Leroy "Mac" MacElrie who claimed to be the programmer of the Conficker worm and turned himself into police.
Revised:  Experts just knew that it was set to go off on April 1. Several anomalous happenings were attributed to Conficker including Leroy "Mac" MacElrie who claimed to be the programmer of the Conficker worm and turned himself in to police.
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Original:  Gaming websites across the internet Blizzard, Joystiq  and affiliates posted reviews and announcements of games with tongue in cheek.
Revised:  Gaming websites across the internet Blizzard, Joystiq , and affiliates posted reviews and announcements of games with tongue in cheek.
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Original:  Even the news articles , such as , NASA reports a shower of diamonds over the Republic of Sudan  was based on a meteorite which passed over Sudan whose fragments did reveal diamonds upon discovery.
Revised:  Even the news articles , such as , NASA reports a shower of diamonds over the Republic of Sudan , which was based on a meteorite which passed over Sudan whose fragments did reveal diamonds upon discovery.
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Original: Wikipedia even fooled Fox News by claiming that "every item on the home page of the user-generated site Wikipedia is fake.
Revised: Wikipedia even fooled Fox News who claimed that "every item on the home page of the user-generated site Wikipedia is fake.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This year Gmail produced a new autopilot feature for April 1, 2009 which can read your email and automatically respond to every message.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hotels.com ran an advertisement offering hotel room bookings on the moon which would be offered on European websites starting at £800 a night.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Related new ]] 
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Original:  Wilf Hanni is at the helm of the Conservative Party which opposes the Recognition and Reconciliation Act, privatization of BC Hyrdro Bill 42 'gag law', and the carbon tax.
Revised:  Wilf Hanni is at the helm of the Conservative Party which opposes the Recognition and Reconciliation Act, privatization of BC Hydro Bill 42 'gag law', and the carbon tax.
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Original:  They propose to reduce senior civil employee pay scale, as well as personal and corporate income tax .
Revised:  They propose to reduce senior civil employee pay scale, as well as personal and corporate income tax 
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