wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  To have taken on such an expedition would have proven dangerous having to go through Bawum, Mambu, Mankanikong, Mankwi and Nji-Mezam, all of whom claim ancestry different from Tikari, the original ancestry of the the Bafut peopl
Revised:  To have taken on such an expedition would have proven furtile having to go through Bawum, Mambu, Mankanikong, Mankwi and Nji-Mezam, all of whom claim ancestry different from Tikari, the original ancestry of the the Bafut peopl
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  To have taken on such an expedition would have proven dangerous having to go through Bawum, Mambu, Mankanikong, Mankwi and Nji-Mezam, all of whom claim ancestry different from Tikari, the original ancestry of the the Bafut peopl
Revised:  To have taken on such an expedition would have proven dangerous having to go through Bawum, Mambu, Mankanikong, Mankwi and Nji-Mezam, all of whom claim ancestry different from Tikari, the original ancestry of the Bafut peopl
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The wars ultimately led to a defeat for the Fon of Bafut, forcing him into exile, and making the Fondom of Bafut part of the German protectorate of Cameroon (KamerunSchutzgebeit) .
Revised:  The wars ultimately led to a defeat for the Fon of Bafut, forcing him into exile, and making the Fondom of Bafut part of the German protectorate of Kamerun .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A brief timeline:  Prof.
Revised:  Timeline Prof.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Stroke and cognitive ageing are well known sources of cognitive loss, the former by neuronal death, the later by weakening of neural connections.
Revised:  Stroke and cognitive ageing are well known sources of cognitive loss, the former by neuronal death, the latter by weakening of neural connections.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  They are unable to accurately reach for visual objects or state the relationship between two objects (above, below, left, right, nearer or farther).
Revised:  They are unable to accurately reach for visual objects and are unable to state the relationship between two objects (above, below, left, right, nearer or farther).
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Topographical disorientation , also known as topographical agnosia and topographagnosia, is the inability to orient oneself in one's surroundings  as a result of focal brain damage.
Revised: Topographical disorientation is the inability to orient oneself in one's surroundings as a result of focal brain damage.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Classification Topographical disorientation is the inability to orient in the surrounding as a result of focal brain damage .
Revised:  Classification Topographical disorientation is the inability to find your way through an environment due to cognitive impairment .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Topographical disorientation may  result from a stroke or part of a progressive illness , hemispatial neglect, dementia, Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  Topographical disorientation may be a lifelong deficit, it may result from a stroke or part of a progressive illness , hemispatial neglect, dementia, Alzheimer's disease.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Topographical disorientation may  result from a stroke or part of a progressive illness , hemispatial neglect, dementia, Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  Topographical disorientation may result from a stroke , or it can occur as part of a progressive illness , hemispatial neglect, dementia, Alzheimer's disease.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  They are unable to accurately reach for visual objects and are unable to state the relationship between an objects with oneself (above, below, left, right, nearer or farther).
Revised:  They are unable to accurately reach for visual objects and are unable to state the relationship between objects and oneself (above, below, left, right, nearer or farther).
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Treatment for recovering navigational skills require strengthening unaffected navigational strategies to bypass  defective ones.
Revised:  Treatment for recovering navigational skills requires strengthening unaffected navigational strategies to bypass defective ones.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Treatment for recovering navigational skills require strengthening unaffected navigational strategies to bypass  defective ones.
Revised:  Treatment for recovering navigational skills require strengthening unaffected navigational strategies to bypass any defective ones.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Classification Topographical disorientation is the inability to find your way through an environment due to cognitive impairment.
Revised: Classification Topographical disorientation is the inability to find one's way through an environment due to cognitive impairment.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Topographical Disorientation has been studied for decades using case studies of patients who have selectively lost their ability to find their way within large-scale, locomotor environments.
Revised:  Topographical disorientation has been studied for decades using case studies of patients who have selectively lost their ability to find their way within large-scale, locomotor environments.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  When he was 10, his family had to migrate from Jandiala Sher Khan to Delhi due to the Partition of India His family lived as refugees in Vijay Nagar, Kingsway Camp and later moved to Old Rajendra Nagar area of New Delhi.
Revised:  When he was 10, his family had to migrate from Jandiala Sher Khan to Delhi due to the Partition His family lived as refugees in Vijay Nagar, Kingsway Camp and later moved to Old Rajendra Nagar area of New Delhi.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Manoj Kumar (born Harikishan Giri Goswami ;
Revised: Manoj Kumar (born Harikishan Giri Goswami on
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  24 July 1937) , also known as Bharat Kumar, is an Indian actor and film director in Bollywood.
Revised:  24 July 1937) is an Indian actor and film director in Bollywood.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  24 July 1937) , also known as Bharat Kumar, is an Indian actor and film director in Bollywood.
Revised:  24 July 1937) , also known as Bharat Kumar, is an Indian actor and director in Bollywood.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He is remembered for his versatile performances in films like Hariyali Aur Raasta, Woh Kaun Thi?, Himalay Ki God Mein, Do Badan, Upkar, Patthar Ke Sanam, Neel Kamal, Purab Aur Paschim, Beimaan, Roti Kapda Aur Makaan, Dus Numbri, Shor, Sanyasi , and Kranti.
Revised:  He is remembered for his versatile performances in films like Hariyali Aur Raasta, Woh Kaun Thi?, Himalay Ki God Mein, Do Badan, Upkar, Patthar Ke Sanam, Neel Kamal, Purab Aur Paschim, Beimaan, Roti Kapda Aur Makaan, Dus Numbri, Shor, Sanyasi and Kranti.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Civilian award 2020 WBR golden era of bollywood award.
Revised: Civilian award 
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Other awards 1968 – BFJA Awards: Best Dialogue for Upkaar.. bfjaawards.com (1968) 2001 – Kalakar Awards for Lifetime Achievement.
Revised: Other awards 1968 – BFJA Awards: Best Dialogue for Upkaar.. bfjaawards.com (1968) 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Sanyasi (1975 film), a religious-themed comedy, had Kumar and Hema Malini in the lead roles and film was hugely successful.
Revised:  Sanyasi (1975 film), a religious-themed comedy, starring Kumar and Hema Malini in the lead roles and film was hugely successful.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Sanyasi (1975 film), a religious-themed comedy, had Kumar and Hema Malini in the lead roles and film was hugely successful.
Revised:  Sanyasi (1975 film), a religious-themed comedy, had Kumar and Hema Malini , was hugely successful.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: References Htin Aung, Maung ;
Revised: References Htin Aung, Maung ,
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Khin Zaw, U ;
Revised:  Khin Zaw, U ,
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Burmese marionettes are very intricate and dexterous as they employ 18 or 19 wires for male and female characters respectively, and each puppet is controlled by only one puppeteer.
Revised:  Burmese marionettes are very intricate and their use requires dexterous skills, as they employ 18 or 19 wires for male and female characters respectively, and each puppet is controlled by only one puppeteer.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  History The probable date of the origin of Burmese marionettes is given as around 1780  during the reign of Singu Min, and their introduction is credited to the Minister of Royal Entertainment, U Thaw.
Revised:  History The probable date of the origin of Burmese marionettes is given as around 1780 , during the reign of Singu Min, and their introduction is credited to the Minister of Royal Entertainment, U Thaw.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  From their inception, marionettes grew in popularity in the courts of the Konbaung dynasty.
Revised:  From their inception, marionettes enjoyed great popularity in the courts of the Konbaung dynasty.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Little has changed since the creation of the art by U Thaw, and the set of characters developed by him is  in use today.
Revised:  Little has changed since the creation of the art by U Thaw, and the set of characters developed by him is still in use today.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Many times, people would ask the puppeteers to mention in a veiled fashion a current event or warning to the ruler  .
Revised:  Many times, people would ask the puppeteers to mention a current event or warning to the ruler .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Many times, people would ask the puppeteers to mention in a veiled fashion a current event or warning to the ruler  .
Revised:  Many times, people would ask the puppeteers to mention in a veiled fashion a current event or warning to the ruler in a veiled fashion .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Thus, information or popular discontent could be transferred on without any disrespect, as marionettes could say things that a human could be punished for with death.
Revised:  Thus, information or popular discontent could be passed on without any disrespect, as marionettes could say things that a human could be punished for with death.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  However, like most forms of traditional artwork, the support dried up upon the colonisation of Upper Burma by the British in November 1885  following the Third Anglo-Burmese War.
Revised:  However, like most forms of traditional arts, patronage vanished upon the colonisation of Upper Burma by the British in November 1885 following the Third Anglo-Burmese War.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  However, like most forms of traditional artwork, the support dried up upon the colonisation of Upper Burma by the British in November 1885  following the Third Anglo-Burmese War.
Revised:  However, like most forms of traditional artwork, the support dried up upon the colonisation of Upper Burma by the British in November 1885 , following the Third Anglo-Burmese War.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Revival In the late 1990s, General Khin Nyunt of the ruling junta lent official support to marionette actors and troupes,  reviving a rapidly dying tradition.
Revised:  Revival In the late 1990s, General Khin Nyunt of the ruling junta lent official support to marionette actors and troupes, thus reviving a rapidly dying tradition.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Nowadays, marionettes are very common in tourist attractions and also amongst the populace, and they have resumed their role of relatively safe political satire reflecting popular discontent.
Revised:  Nowadays, marionettes are very common as tourist attractions and also amongst the populace, and they have resumed their role of relatively safe political satire reflecting popular discontent.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A new genre of yoke thé is emerging  where a character and a real life actor perform the same feat , usually with the yoke thé puppets able to mimic and sometimes out-perform their human counterparts.
Revised:  Also, a new genre of yoke thé is emerging where a character and a real life actor perform the same feat , usually with the yoke thé puppets able to mimic and sometimes out-perform their human counterparts.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  A new genre of yoke thé is emerging  where a character and a real life actor perform the same feat , usually with the yoke thé puppets able to mimic and sometimes out-perform their human counterparts.
Revised:  A new genre of yoke thé is emerging , where a character and a real life actor perform the same feat , usually with the yoke thé puppets able to mimic and sometimes out-perform their human counterparts.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  A new genre of yoke thé is emerging  where a character and a real life actor perform the same feat , usually with the yoke thé puppets able to mimic and sometimes out-perform their human counterparts.
Revised:  A new genre of yoke thé is emerging where a character and a real life actor perform the same show , usually with the yoke thé puppets able to mimic and sometimes out-perform their human counterparts.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Further reading Bruns, Axel , Burmese Puppetry, Bangkok, White Lotus Press, 2006, Bruns, Axel: The Burmese Marionette Theater .
Revised: Further reading Bruns, Axel : Burmese Puppetry, Bangkok, White Lotus Press, 2006, Bruns, Axel: The Burmese Marionette Theater .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Further reading Bruns, Axel , Burmese Puppetry, Bangkok, White Lotus Press, 2006, Bruns, Axel: The Burmese Marionette Theater .
Revised: Further reading Bruns, Axel , Burmese Puppetry, Bangkok, White Lotus Press, 2006, Bruns, Axel: The Burmese Marionette Theater 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  It offers arguments that propose that neither Charles Darwin nor religious creationism adequately describes the event of life, intellect, consciousness and various other concepts   .
Revised:  It offers arguments that propose that neither Charles Darwin nor religious creationism adequately describes the event of life, intellect, consciousness and various other concepts . .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Meaning and Purpose, written by Kenneth Walker (author), was originally published in September 1944 by Jonathan Cape, London, and then again by Pelican books in 1950.
Revised: Meaning and Purpose, written by Kenneth Walker (author), was first published in September 1944 by Jonathan Cape, London, and then again by Pelican books in 1950.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Meaning and Purpose, written by Kenneth Walker (author), was originally published in September 1944 by Jonathan Cape, London, and then again by Pelican books in 1950.
Revised: Meaning and Purpose, written by Kenneth Walker (author), was originally published in September 1944 by Jonathan Cape, London, and republished by Pelican books in 1950.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The purpose of the book, as stated in the preface, is "... to examine critically those scientific theories of the last hundred years which have exerted a strong influence on our thinking, not so much for the purpose of assessing their worth as for that of discovering the effect which they have had on our philosophy of life."
Revised:  The purpose of the book, as stated in the preface, was "... to examine critically those scientific theories of the last hundred years which have exerted a strong influence on our thinking, not so much for the purpose of assessing their worth as for that of discovering the effect which they have had on our philosophy of life."
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The book details an alternative perception of life and reality.
Revised:  The book detailed an alternative perception of life and reality.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  It offers arguments that propose that neither Charles Darwin nor religious creationism adequately describes the event of life, intellect, consciousness and various other concepts.
Revised:  It offered arguments proposing that neither Charles Darwin nor religious creationism adequately describes the event of life, intellect, consciousness and various other concepts.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  It offers arguments that propose that neither Charles Darwin nor religious creationism adequately describes the event of life, intellect, consciousness and various other concepts.
Revised:  It offers arguments that propose that neither Charles Darwin nor religious creationism adequately described the event of life, intellect, consciousness and various other concepts.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Prominent scientists whose writings are discussed in the book and listed in the bibliography are Sir Arthur Eddington, Ernst Haeckel, Sir Julian Huxley, Sir James Jeans and A. N. Whitehead   .
Revised:  Prominent scientists whose writings are discussed in the book and listed in the book's bibliography were Sir Arthur Eddington, Ernst Haeckel, Sir Julian Huxley, Sir James Jeans and A. N. Whitehead .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Prominent scientists whose writings are discussed in the book and listed in the bibliography are Sir Arthur Eddington, Ernst Haeckel, Sir Julian Huxley, Sir James Jeans and A. N. Whitehead   .
Revised:  Prominent scientists whose writings are discussed in the book and listed in the bibliography are Sir Arthur Eddington, Ernst Haeckel, Sir Julian Huxley, Sir James Jeans and A. N. Whitehead . .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Meaning and Purpose, written by Kenneth Walker, was first published in September 1944 by Jonathan Cape, London, and republished by Pelican books in 1950.
Revised: First edition Meaning and Purpose, written by Kenneth Walker, was first published in September 1944 by Jonathan Cape, London, and republished by Pelican books in 1950.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: First edition Meaning and Purpose, written by Kenneth Walker, was first published in September 1944 by Jonathan Cape, London, and republished by Pelican books in 1950.
Revised: First edition Meaning and Purpose, written by Kenneth Walker, was first published in September 1944 by Jonathan Cape, London, and republished by Pelican Books in 1950.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  This is an incentive for the student to perform well during the placement as it helps with two otherwise unwelcome stresses: the lack of money in the final year, and finding a job when the University course ends  
Revised:  This is an incentive for the student to perform well during the placement as it helps with two otherwise unwelcome stresses: the lack of money in the final year, and finding a job when the University course ends . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  This is an incentive for the student to perform well during the placement as it helps with two otherwise unwelcome stresses: the lack of money in the final year, and finding a job when the University course ends . Effect on employment outcomes Research has shown that having internship experience is important, as job candidates with internship experience had a higher chance of being selected for a job interview than candidates without internship experience.
Revised:  This is an incentive for the student to perform well during the placement as it helps with two otherwise unwelcome stresses: the lack of money in the final year, and finding a job when the University course ends Effect on employment outcomes Research has shown that having internship experience is important, as job candidates with internship experience had a higher chance of being selected for a job interview than candidates without internship experience.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: A student who fails to find a placement may sometimes be required to attend school every day—continuing the normal school day, or doing a placement around the school such as aiding the caretaker for example, or helping out elsewhere in the school, such as with language and PE departments, or with ICT technicians.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Definition of Internship (as set forth in the Ohio State University Department of Political Science, accessed January 22, 2013 Once confined to medical graduates, internship is used  for a wide range of placements in businesses, non-profit organizations and government agencies.
Revised:  Definition of Internship (as set forth in the Ohio State University Department of Political Science, accessed January 22, 2013 Once confined to medical graduates, internship is used practice for a wide range of placements in businesses, non-profit organizations and government agencies.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  It is this moment of surprise, generating laughter and new insight, which facilitates the ability to see a different thought pattern which initially was not URL According to de Bono, lateral thinking deliberately distances itself from the standard perception of creativity as "vertical" logic, the classic method for problem solving.
Revised:  It is this moment of surprise, generating laughter and new insight, which facilitates the ability to see a different thought pattern which initially was not obvious. According to de Bono, lateral thinking deliberately distances itself from the standard perception of creativity as "vertical" logic, the classic method for problem solving.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Edward de Bono also links lateral thinking with humour, arguing there's a switch-over from a familiar pattern to a new, unexpected one.
Revised:  Edward de Bono also links lateral thinking with humour, arguing it entails a switch-over from a familiar pattern to a new, unexpected one.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The thinker creates a list of provocations and then uses the most outlandish ones to move their thinking forward to new ideas.
Revised:  The thinker creates a list of provocations and then uses the most outlandish ones to move their thinking forward on new ideas.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Why ?", in a non-threatening way : why something exists or why it is done the way it is.
Revised:  challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Why ?", in a non-threatening way : why something exists or why it is done the way it is.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Why ?", in a non-threatening way : why something exists or why it is done the way it is.
Revised:  Challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Why ?", in a non-threatening why : why something exists or why it is done the way it is.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Why ?", in a non-threatening way : why something exists or why it is done the way it is.
Revised:  Challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Why ?", in a non-threatening way : why something exists or who it is done the way it is.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The result is a very clear understanding of " Why ?", which naturally leads to new ideas.
Revised:  The result is a very clear understanding of " Who ?", which naturally leads to new ideas.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Who ?", in a non-threatening why: why something exists or who it is done the way it is.
Revised: challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Why ?", in a non-threatening why: why something exists or who it is done the way it is.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Who ?", in a non-threatening why: why something exists or who it is done the way it is.
Revised: challenge A tool which is designed to ask the question, " Who ?", in a non-threatening why: why something exists or why it is done the way it is.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The result is a very clear understanding of " Who ?", which naturally leads to new ideas.
Revised:  The result is a very clear understanding of " Why ?", which naturally leads to new ideas.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:   Bramhall accused him of teachings that could lead to atheism.
Revised:  hello Bramhall accused him of teachings that could lead to atheism.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  First edition (1973)  title: Thomas White's De Mundo Examined 1644.
Revised:  First edition (1973) with the title: Thomas White's De Mundo Examined 1644.
Edit intent: clarity