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Original:   The word ecotone was coined by Alfred Russel Wallace, who first observed the abrupt boundary between two biomes in 1859.
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Original: David Darling (born 29 July 1953 in Glossop, Derbyshire) is an English astronomer and full-time freelance science writer  . Darling has published numerous popular science works, including Life Everywhere: The Maverick Science of Astrobiology in 2001.
Revised: David Darling (born 29 July 1953 in Glossop, Derbyshire) is an English astronomer , freelance science writer . Darling has published numerous popular science works, including Life Everywhere: The Maverick Science of Astrobiology in 2001.
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Original:  He is perhaps most famous for his bestselling book The Universal Book of Mathematics  . External links cosmosportal.org, biography The Worlds of David Darling, official site The Internet Encyclopedia of Science, formerly the Encyclopedia of Astrobiology, Astronomy, and Spaceflight The Encyclopedia of Alternative Energy and Sustainable Living Biography of David Darling
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Original:  He is perhaps most famous for his bestselling book The Universal Book of Mathematics  . External links cosmosportal.org, biography The Worlds of David Darling, official site The Internet Encyclopedia of Science, formerly the Encyclopedia of Astrobiology, Astronomy, and Spaceflight The Encyclopedia of Alternative Energy and Sustainable Living Biography of David Darling
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Original:  Bibliography We Are Not Alone: Why We Have Already Found Extraterrestrial Life (2010).
Revised: A review of Darling's book Soul Search, stated that "he develops a sort of scientific pantheism positing that, with death, we move from the narrow consciousness of our highly selective, reality-filtering brain to the wider, timeless consciousness of the unbound universe.""Soul Search: A Scientist Explores the Afterlife". Publisher's Weekly. Retrieved 24 January 2021. Bibliography We Are Not Alone: Why We Have Already Found Extraterrestrial Life (2010).
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Original: Nasreen Jalil is the deputy convener of Muttahida Qaumi Movement's (MQM) Coordinate Committee.
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Original:  References Category:1947 births Category:Living people Category:University of Karachi alumni Category:Muhajir people Category:Muttahida Qaumi Movement politicians Category:Mayors of places in Pakistan Category:Pakistani people of Iraqi descent Category:Mayors of Karachi Category:Politicians from Karachi Category:Politicians from Lahore Category:21st-century women politicians Category:Pakistani senators (14th Parliamen
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Original: Nasreen Jalil ( Urdu: نسرین جلیل ) (born: 22 February 1944, Lahore) is a Pakistani politician who serves as a member of the Senate of Pakistan from Sindh since 2012.
Revised: Nasreen Jalil ( ) (born: 22 February 1944, Lahore) is a Pakistani politician who serves as a member of the Senate of Pakistan from Sindh since 2012.
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Original:  Rodriguez has also employed the "Last Survivor of the World Trade Center" URL
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Original: Regional Variations Historian Sean Cadigan writes, “Newfoundland and Labrador’s climate and soil have not been conducive to agriculture, but outport isolation and poor incomes in the fishery have made supplementary farming crucial."
Revised: Regional variations Historian Sean Cadigan writes, “Newfoundland and Labrador’s climate and soil have not been conducive to agriculture, but outport isolation and poor incomes in the fishery have made supplementary farming crucial."
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Original: Kai Dewing is notably the most incredible bricklayer the world has ever seen and also he is packing.
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Original:  Neal from Kent  is known as the best bricklayer in the world  .
Revised:  Neal from Kent , UK is known as the best bricklayer in the world .
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Original:  Neal from Kent, UK is known as the best bricklayer in the world after consistently laying 1,800 bricks per day.
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Original:  This finding largely opposed the published Nurses' Health Study conclusion .
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Original:  Other mass health studies British Doctors Study Framingham Heart Study%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Channing.harvard.edu -
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Original: Breast cancer: a 2021 study showed that a healthy plant-based diet protects against breast cancer, especially aggressive forms.
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Original: Ethnoscape is one of five elementary framework (ethnoscapes, mediascapes, technoscapes, financescapes, and ideoscapes) used by Arjun Appadurai, in purpose of exploring fundamental disjuntures of global cultural flows.
Revised: Ethnoscape is one of five elementary frameworks (ethnoscapes, mediascapes, technoscapes, financescapes, and ideoscapes) used by Arjun Appadurai, in purpose of exploring fundamental disjuntures of global cultural flows.
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Original:  Ethnoscapes allow us to recognize that our notions of space, place and community have become much more complex, indeed a ‘single community’ may now be dispersed across a variety of site 
Revised:  Ethnoscapes allow us to recognize that our notions of space, place and community have become much more complex, indeed a ‘single community’ may now be dispersed across a variety of sites. 
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Original:  Ethnoscapes allow us to recognize that our notions of space, place and community have become much more complex, indeed a ‘single community’ may now be dispersed across a variety of site 
Revised:  Ethnoscapes allow us to recognize that our notions of space, place and community have become much more complex, indeed a ‘single community’ may now be dispersed across a variety of site Reference
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Original: Ethnoscape is one of five elementary frameworks (ethnoscapes, mediascapes, technoscapes, financescapes, and ideoscapes) used by Arjun Appadurai, in purpose of exploring fundamental disjuntures of global cultural flows.
Revised: Ethnoscape is one of five elementary frameworks (ethnoscapes, mediascapes, technoscapes, financescapes, and ideoscapes) used by Arjun Appadurai, in purpose of exploring fundamental disjunctures of global cultural flows.
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Original:  But it is to say that the warp of these stabilities is everywhere shot through with the woof of human motion, as more persons and groups deal with the realities of having to move of the fantasies of wanting to move.
Revised:  But it is to say that the warp of these stabilities is everywhere shot through with the weft of human motion, as more persons and groups deal with the realities of having to move of the fantasies of wanting to move.
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Original: Ethnoscape is one of five elementary frameworks (ethnoscapes, mediascapes, technoscapes, financescapes, and ideoscapes) used by Arjun Appadurai, in purpose of exploring fundamental disjunctures of global cultural flows.
Revised: Ethnoscape is one of five elementary frameworks (ethnoscapes, mediascapes, technoscapes, financescapes, and ideoscapes) used by Arjun Appadurai, in purpose of exploring fundamental discrepancies of global cultural flows.
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Original:  After returning to Canada she became increasingly interested in aboriginal affairs, helping to develop an aboriginal magazine called Tawwow .
Revised:  After returning to Canada she became increasingly interested in aboriginal affairs, helping to develop an aboriginal magazine called Tawow .
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Original: Soviet Union Prior to its dissolution in 1991, the USSR had the second largest economy in the world after the United States.
Revised: Soviet Union Prior to its dissolution in 1991, the Soviet Union had the second largest economy in the world after the United States.
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Original:  The economy of the Soviet Union was the modern world's first  centrally planned economy.
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Original:  Deindustrialisation is common to all mature Western economies, as international trade, social changes  and urbanisation have changed the financial demographics of the world . Phenomena such as the mechanisation of labour render industrial societies obsolete, and lead to the de-establishment of industrial communities.
Revised:  Deindustrialisation is common to all mature Western economies, as international trade, social changes , and urbanisation have changed the financial demographics of the world . Phenomena such as the mechanisation of labour render industrial societies obsolete, and lead to the de-establishment of industrial communities.
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Original:  Deindustrialisation is common to all mature Western economies, as international trade, social changes  and urbanisation have changed the financial demographics of the world . Phenomena such as the mechanisation of labour render industrial societies obsolete, and lead to the de-establishment of industrial communities.
Revised:  Deindustrialisation is common to all mature Western economies, as international trade, social changes and urbanisation have changed the financial demographics after World War II . Phenomena such as the mechanisation of labour render industrial societies obsolete, and lead to the de-establishment of industrial communities.
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Original:  In 2005, the population has grown to 1.5 million, ranking as the sixth largest city proper in the US . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading Afonso, A. (2005) "When the Export of Social Problems is no Longer Possible:
Revised:  In 2005, the population has grown to 1.5 million, ranking as the sixth largest city proper in the US References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading Afonso, A. (2005) "When the Export of Social Problems is no Longer Possible:
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Original:  In 2005, the population has grown to 1.5 million, ranking as the sixth largest city proper in the US . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading Afonso, A. (2005) "When the Export of Social Problems is no Longer Possible:
Revised:  In 2005, the population has grown to 1.5 million, ranking as the sixth largest city proper in the US . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading Afonso, A. (2005) "When the Export of Social Problems is no Longer Possible:
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Original:  DOI: 10.1111/hic3.12099 External links "The Qualitative Shift in European Integration: Towards Permanent Wage Pressures and a 'Latin-Americanization' of Europe?", Erik S. Reinert "De-industrialisation in Sub-Saharan Africa: Myth or Crisis?"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Economic problems *Count
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Original:  Some argue also that the shift has been ( from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast  and the high supply of workers  (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation ) willing to accept low wages in the Southwest ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
Revised:  Some argue also that the shift has been from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast and the high supply of workers (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation ) willing to accept low wages in the Southwest ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
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Original:  Some argue also that the shift has been ( from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast  and the high supply of workers  (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation ) willing to accept low wages in the Southwest ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
Revised:  Some argue also that the shift has been ( from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast , and the high supply of workers (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation ) willing to accept low wages in the Southwest ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
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Original:  Some argue also that the shift has been ( from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast  and the high supply of workers  (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation ) willing to accept low wages in the Southwest ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
Revised:  Some argue also that the shift has been ( from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast and the high supply of workers in the Southwest (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation ) willing to accept low wages in the Southwest ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
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Original:  Some argue also that the shift has been ( from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast  and the high supply of workers  (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation ) willing to accept low wages in the Southwest ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
Revised:  Some argue also that the shift has been ( from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast and the high supply of workers (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation willing to accept low wages in the Southwest ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
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Original:  Some argue also that the shift has been ( from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast  and the high supply of workers  (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation ) willing to accept low wages in the Southwest ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
Revised:  Some argue also that the shift has been ( from the heavily unionised Northeast and Midwest towards the Southeast and the high supply of workers (largely immigrant, first-generation, and second-generation ) willing to accept low wages ), along with increasing labour productivity, which has led to higher levels of output without increases in the total number of workers.
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Original:  Many argue that the textile industry , was the dominant factor in the industrialisation of New England, and in the 20th century increasingly textile factories were moved to the South.
Revised:  Many argue that the textile industry was the dominant factor in the industrialisation of New England, and in the 20th century increasingly textile factories were moved to the South.
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Original:  Many argue that the textile industry , was the dominant factor in the industrialisation of New England, and in the 20th century increasingly textile factories were moved to the South.
Revised:  Many argue that the textile industry , was the dominant factor in the industrialisation of New England, and in the 20th century , increasingly, textile factories were moved to the South.
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Original:   Expressionism as the radical creative tendency in architecture.
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Original:   The main problem in the critical analysis of the theoretical interpretations of the concept of expression in architecture, lies in the fact that the concept of expression is used in different ways in different fields of science and art.
Revised:  Meaning The main problem in the critical analysis of the theoretical interpretations of the concept of expression in architecture, lies in the fact that the concept of expression is used in different ways in different fields of science and art.
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Original:  Recent evidence points to a possibility of MVR at neocortical connections of the somatosensory corte  
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Original:  Recent evidence points to a possibility of MVR at neocortical connections of the somatosensory corte  
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Original:  In    the mammalian brain, MVR has been shown to be common in CA1 and Schaffer Collateral cells.
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Original:  In    the mammalian brain, MVR has been shown to be common in CA1 and Schaffer Collateral cells.
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Original:  It has also been reported in the ribbon synapses formed by inner hair cells, as with spiral ganglion neurons.
Revised:  It has also been reported in the ribbon synapses formed between inner hair cell and spiral ganglion neurons.
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Original:  ), also known simply Dutch Burgher Union (DBU), is an organisation of Dutch Burghers .
Revised:  ), known commonly as the Dutch Burgher Union (DBU), is an organisation of Dutch Burghers .
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Original:  The union was established on 18 January 1908 , by Richard Gerald Anthonisz.
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Original:  History  On 12 November 1907 Richard Gerald Anthonisz (1852–1930) organised a preliminary meeting of men and women of the Dutch Burgher community at the Lindsay School Hall in Bambalapitiya to consider the establishment of a Dutch Burgher Union.
Revised:  History On 12 November 1907 Richard Anthonisz organised a preliminary meeting of men and women of the Dutch Burgher community at the Lindsay School Hall in Bambalapitiya to consider the establishment of a Dutch Burgher Union.
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Original:  At the meeting Frederick Charles Loos CMG (1934-1911) , a Proctor and Member of the Legislative Council was elected as the first president of the union, with Anthonisz as Honorary Secretary (a position he retained until 1915).
Revised:  At the meeting Frederick Charles Loos , a Proctor and Member of the Legislative Council was elected as the first president of the union, with Anthonisz as Honorary Secretary (a position he retained until 1915).
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Original:  The second president of the union was Henry Lorenz Wendt (1958-1911) howeverhe died two months after his election and in 1912 was replaced by Fedrick Henry de Vos (1857–1920) .
Revised:  The second president of the union was Henry Lorenz Wendt who, however, died two months after his election and in 1912 was replaced by Fedrick Henry de Vos (1857–1920) .
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Original:  The second president of the union was Henry Lorenz Wendt (1958-1911) howeverhe died two months after his election and in 1912 was replaced by Fedrick Henry de Vos (1857–1920) .
Revised:  The second president of the union was Henry Lorenz Wendt (1958-1911) howeverhe died two months after his election and in 1912 was replaced by Fedrick Henry de Vos .
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Original:  Now it functions in Colombo as centre of Dutch Burgher's social and community activities.
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Original:  Initially  the union sublet two rooms at Sea View, Kollupitiya however the union shortly afterwards set about raising funds to establish  permanent accommodation.
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Original:  Initially  the union sublet two rooms at Sea View, Kollupitiya however the union shortly afterwards set about raising funds to establish  permanent accommodation.
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Original:  Initially  the union sublet two rooms at Sea View, Kollupitiya however the union shortly afterwards set about raising funds to establish  permanent accommodation.
Revised:  Initially the union sublet two rooms at Sea View, Kollupitiya however the union shortly afterwards set about raising funds to establish a more permanent accommodation.
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Original:  In 1913  the union acquired land in Cinnamon Gardens on Buller's Road (now known as Bauddhaloka Mawatha) and Serpentine Road, where it constructed a two-storey building.
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Original:  In 1913  the union acquired land in Cinnamon Gardens on Buller's Road (now known as Bauddhaloka Mawatha) and Serpentine Road, where it constructed a two-storey building.
Revised:  In 1913 the union acquired land in Cinnamon Gardens on Buller's Road (now Bauddhaloka Mawatha) and Serpentine Road, where it constructed a two-storey building.
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Original:  As the suburb developed  the union was forced to sell much of its grounds for new roads and to pay for increasing property rates.
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