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Original:  A special hotline has been set up, along with a crisis center for parents of the students.
Revised:  A special hotline was set up, along with a crisis center for parents of the students.
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Original:  A special forces team called the GIGN, has arrived in a helicopter from Villacoublay Military Airport just west of Paris.
Revised:  A special forces team called the GIGN, was dispatched to the scene, coming by helicopter from Villacoublay Military Airport just west of Paris.
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Original:  Interior Minister Nicolas Sarkozy said he is paying close attention to the situation.
Revised:  Interior Minister Nicolas Sarkozy said he was paying close attention to the situation.
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Original:  The school is located in northwestern France in Sablé-sur-Sarthe near the city of Le Mans .
Revised:  The school is located in northwestern France in Sablé-sur-Sarthe near the city of Le Mans 
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Original:  The man has now surrendered himself and the hostages to the police after negotiations
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Original: Location of Le Mans within France The man who took at least 22 people hostage in Colbert de Torcy High School in Le Mans France, most of whom were teenagers, surrendered without incident.
Revised: Location of Le Mans within France The man who took at least 22 people hostage in Colbert de Torcy High School near Le Mans, France, most of whom were teenagers, surrendered without incident.
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Original:  Students were allowed to use their mobile phones to communicate with their famlies according to Jean Luc Prigent, head of security for the Le Mans region which includes the school.
Revised:  Students were allowed to use their mobile phones to communicate with their families according to Jean Luc Prigent, head of security for the Le Mans region which includes the school.
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Original:  He's also asked to speak with Francois Fillon, the local mayor and former French education minister.
Revised:  He's also asked to speak with François Fillon, the local mayor and former French education minister.
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Original: A 20-year-old man from Warilla, a suburb of Wollongone handed himself into police yesterday after seeing his photograph in a newspaper.
Revised: A 20-year-old man from Warilla, a suburb of Wollongong handed himself into police yesterday after seeing his photograph in a newspaper.
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Original:  If I was a betting man I'd be running at close to odds-on.  
Revised:  If I was a betting man I'd be running at close to odds-on. " 
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Original: :w: TeliaSonera Sweden has announced today that it is increasing the speed of data traffic through its GSM mobile network due to the introduction of EDGE technology.
Revised:  TeliaSonera Sweden has announced today that it is increasing the speed of data traffic through its GSM mobile network due to the introduction of EDGE technology.
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Original:  Category:Sweden Category:Science and technology Category:Economy and business Category:Publishe
Revised:  Category:Sweden Category:Science and technology Category:Economy and busine
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Original:  The buildings at Abu Ghraib were originally built by British contractors in the 1960s   .
Revised:  The buildings at Abu Ghraib were originally built by British contractors in the 1960s . .
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Original:  In January 2005,  United States Army court martial  found Army Spc. Charles Graner guilty of abusing prisoners at Iraq's Abu Ghraib prison.
Revised:  In January 2005, a United States Army court martial found Army Spc. Charles Graner guilty of abusing prisoners at Iraq's Abu Ghraib prison.
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Original:  In January 2005,  United States Army court martial  found Army Spc. Charles Graner guilty of abusing prisoners at Iraq's Abu Ghraib prison.
Revised:  In January 2005, United States Army court martial found Army Spc. Charles Graner guilty of abusing prisoners at the Abu Ghraib prison.
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Original:  Total nine American soldiers were found guilty in  the Abu Ghraib abuse case .
Revised:  A total nine other American soldiers were found guilty in the Abu Ghraib abuse case .
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Original:  Total nine American soldiers were found guilty in  the Abu Ghraib abuse case .
Revised:  Total nine American soldiers were found guilty in allegations stemming from the Abu Ghraib abuse case .
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Original:  A total  nine other American soldiers were found guilty in allegations stemming from the Abu Ghraib prison abuse scandal.
Revised:  A total of nine other American soldiers were found guilty in allegations stemming from the Abu Ghraib prison abuse scandal.
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Original:  The operation of Abu Ghraib will be transfered to the government of Iraq.
Revised:  The operation of Abu Ghraib will be transferred to the government of Iraq.
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Original: The Spanish government  in collaboration with the Spanish SGAE ( Authors and Editors General Society ) have developed a new Internet law that will blame the ISPs for the nature of the web content they provide.
Revised: The Spanish government , in collaboration with the Spanish SGAE ( Authors and Editors General Society ) have developed a new Internet law that will blame the ISPs for the nature of the web content they provide.
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Original: The Spanish government  in collaboration with the Spanish SGAE ( Authors and Editors General Society ) have developed a new Internet law that will blame the ISPs for the nature of the web content they provide.
Revised: The Spanish government in collaboration with the Spanish Authors and Editors General Society ) have developed a new Internet law that will blame the ISPs for the nature of the web content they provide.
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Original: The Spanish government  in collaboration with the Spanish SGAE ( Authors and Editors General Society ) have developed a new Internet law that will blame the ISPs for the nature of the web content they provide.
Revised: The Spanish government in collaboration with the Spanish SGAE ( Authors and Editors General Society (SGAE), has developed a new Internet law that will blame the ISPs for the nature of the web content they provide.
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Original: The Spanish government  in collaboration with the Spanish SGAE ( Authors and Editors General Society ) have developed a new Internet law that will blame the ISPs for the nature of the web content they provide.
Revised: The Spanish government in collaboration with the Spanish SGAE ( Authors and Editors General Society ) have developed a new Internet law that will hold Internet servicer providers responsible for the web content they provide.
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Original:  This law is intended to stop the copyrighted material piracy , but it will enforce ISP’s to censor web content in order to detect possible illegal issues.
Revised:  This law is intended to stop the piracy of copyrighted material , but it will enforce ISP’s to censor web content in order to detect possible illegal issues.
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Original:  The Spanish Internet User Association has already pointed out that such law will break  Spanish Constitution and several European directives that discharge ISPs responsibility. Referenc
Revised:  The Spanish Internet User Association has already pointed out that such law will break the Spanish Constitution and several European directives that discharge ISPs responsibility. Referenc
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Original:  The Spanish Internet User Association has already pointed out that such law will break  Spanish Constitution and several European directives that discharge ISPs responsibility. Referenc
Revised:  The Spanish Internet User Association has already pointed out that such law will break Spanish Constitution and several European directives that discharge an ISP's responsibility. Referenc
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Original:  This law is intended to stop the piracy of copyrighted material, but it will enforce ISP’s to censor web content in order to detect possible illegal issues.
Revised:  This law is intended to stop the piracy of copyrighted material, but it will force ISPs to censor web content in order to detect possible illegal issues.
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Original: The Spanish government, in collaboration with the Spanish  Authors and Editors General Society (SGAE), has developed a new Internet law that will hold Internet servicer providers responsible for the web content they provide .
Revised: The Spanish government, in collaboration with the Spanish Authors and Editors (SGAE), has developed a new Internet law that will hold Internet servicer providers responsible for the web content they provide .
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Original: The Spanish government, in collaboration with the Spanish  Authors and Editors General Society (SGAE), has developed a new Internet law that will hold Internet servicer providers responsible for the web content they provide .
Revised: The Spanish government, in collaboration with the Spanish Authors and Editors General Society (SGAE), has developed a new Internet law that will hold Internet Service Providers responsible for the web content they provide .
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Original: The Spanish government, in collaboration with the Spanish  Authors and Editors General Society (SGAE), has developed a new Internet law that will hold Internet servicer providers responsible for the web content they provide .
Revised: The Spanish government, in collaboration with the Spanish Authors and Editors General Society (SGAE), has developed a new Internet law that will hold Internet servicer providers responsible for the web content provided through their services .
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Original:  This law is intended to stop the piracy of copyrighted material, but it will force ISPs to censor web content in order to detect possible legal issues.
Revised:  This law is intended to prevent the piracy of copyrighted material, but it will force ISPs to censor web content in order to detect possible legal issues.
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Original:  This law is intended to stop the piracy of copyrighted material, but it will force ISPs to censor web content in order to detect possible legal issues.
Revised:  This law is intended to stop the piracy of copyrighted material, but it may force ISPs to censor web content in order to detect possible legal issues.
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Original:  This law is intended to stop the piracy of copyrighted material, but it will force ISPs to censor web content in order to detect possible legal issues.
Revised:  This law is intended to stop the piracy of copyrighted material, but it will force ISPs to censor web content in order to deflect possible legal issues.
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Original:  The Spanish Internet User Association has already pointed out that such law will break the Spanish Constitution and several European directives that discharge an ISP's responsibility.
Revised:  The Spanish Internet User Association has claimed that such law will break the Spanish Constitution and several European directives that discharge an ISP's responsibility.
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Original: The bail for Mark Berndt, 61, was raised from $2.3 million, which is $100, 000 per count, to 23 million by Wednesday morning.
Revised: The bail for Mark Berndt, 61, was raised from 2.3 million, which is $100,000 per count, to $ 23 million by Wednesday morning.
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Original:  An elementary school teacher of 30 years was arrested Monday in , on the charge of 23 counts listed in the arrest warrant of performing a "lewd act on a child . " 
Revised:  An elementary school teacher of 30 years was arrested Monday in , on the charge of 23 counts listed in the arrest warrant of performing a "lewd act on a child " 
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Original:  An elementary school teacher of 30 years was arrested Monday in , on the charge of 23 counts listed in the arrest warrant of performing a "lewd act on a child . " 
Revised:  An elementary school teacher of 30 years was arrested Monday in , on the charge of 23 counts listed in the arrest warrant of performing a "lewd act on a child . " .
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Original:  The Los Angeles County Sheriff’s office was tipped off by a photographic developer and said it had investigated and surveilled the teacher for almost a year before making the arrest.
Revised: Authorities were tipped off by a photographic developer. The Los Angeles County Sheriff’s office was tipped off by a photographic developer and said it had investigated and surveilled the teacher for almost a year before making the arrest.
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Original:  The Los Angeles County Sheriff’s office was tipped off by a photographic developer and said it had investigated and surveilled the teacher for almost a year before making the arrest.
Revised:  The Los Angeles County Sheriff’s office said it had investigated and surveilled the teacher for almost a year before making the arrest.
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Original:  Ten out of the 23 victims, who were between the ages of 7 and 10 at the time, have not yet been identified.
Revised:  Ten out of the 23 victims, who were between the ages of 7 and 10 years old — have not yet been identified.
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Original: Susan G. Komen for the Cure has stopped funding breast cancer screening as well as educational programming on breast health run by Planned Parenthood and its affiliates.
Revised: Susan G. Komen for the Cure has stopped funding breast cancer screening and educational programming on breast health run by Planned Parenthood and its affiliates.
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Original:  According to the New York Times, Planned Parenthood received nearly $700,000 from the Komen Foundations last year alone.
Revised:  Planned Parenthood received nearly $700,000 from the Komen Foundations last year alone.
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Original:  According to the New York Times, Planned Parenthood received nearly $700,000 from the Komen Foundations last year alone.
Revised:  According to the New York Times, Planned Parenthood received nearly $700,000 from the Komen Foundation last year alone.
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Original:  In the last five years  the funding from the foundation has granted 170,000 women breast exams.
Revised:  In the last five years , the funding from the foundation has granted 170,000 women breast exams.
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Original:  Leslie Aun, a spokeswoman for the Komen Foundation, told the Associated Press the foundation adopted a new rule that does not allow grants or funding to  organizations that are under legal investigation.
Revised:  Leslie Aun, a spokesperson for the Komen Foundation, told the Associated Press the foundation adopted a new rule that does not allow grants or funding to organizations that are under legal investigation.
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Original:  Leslie Aun, a spokeswoman for the Komen Foundation, told the Associated Press the foundation adopted a new rule that does not allow grants or funding to  organizations that are under legal investigation.
Revised:  Leslie Aun, a spokeswoman for the Komen Foundation, said the organization adopted a new rule that does not allow grants or funding to organizations that are under legal investigation.
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Original:  Leslie Aun, a spokeswoman for the Komen Foundation, told the Associated Press the foundation adopted a new rule that does not allow grants or funding to  organizations that are under legal investigation.
Revised:  Leslie Aun, a spokeswoman for the Komen Foundation, told the Associated Press the foundation adopted a new rule that does not allow grants or funding to be awarded to organizations that are under legal investigation.
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Original:  This new rule disqualified Planned Parenthood due to a pending investigation on how Planned Parenthood spends and reports its money .
Revised:  Komen's policy disqualified Planned Parenthood due to a pending investigation on how Planned Parenthood spends and reports its money .
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Original:  This inquiry is being conducted by GOP Rep. Cliff Stearn, of Florida .
Revised:  This inquiry is being conducted by Rep. Cliff Stearn, of Florida .
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Original:  US Navy 111009-N-NW827-184 Adm.
Revised:  US Navy Adm.
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Original:  Samuel J. Locklear III completes crosses the finish line of the annual Susan G. Komen Race for the Cure Cecile Richards, president of Planned Parenthood stated on plannedparenthood.org , "While this is deeply disturbing and disappointing, we want to assure women who rely on Planned Parenthood for breast care that we're still here for them, and we always will be.
Revised:  Samuel J. Locklear III completes crosses the finish line of the annual Susan G. Komen Race for the Cure Cecile Richards, president of Planned Parenthood , said , "While this is deeply disturbing and disappointing, we want to assure women who rely on Planned Parenthood for breast care that we're still here for them, and we always will be.
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Original: Susan G. Komen for the Cure has stopped funding breast cancer screening and educational programming on breast health run by Planned Parenthood and its affiliates.
Revised:  has stopped funding breast cancer screening and educational programming on breast health run by Planned Parenthood and its affiliates.
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Original: Susan G. Komen for the Cure has stopped funding breast cancer screening and educational programming on breast health run by Planned Parenthood and its affiliates.
Revised: Susan G. Komen for the Cure has stopped funding and educational programming on breast health run by Planned Parenthood and its affiliates.
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Original: Susan G. Komen for the Cure has stopped funding breast cancer screening and educational programming on breast health run by Planned Parenthood and its affiliates.
Revised: Susan G. Komen for the Cure has stopped funding breast cancer screening and educational programming on breast health run by and its affiliates.
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Original:  Komen's policy disqualified Planned Parenthood due to a pending investigation on how Planned Parenthood spends and reports its money that is being conducted by Rep. Cliff Stearns (R-Florida).
Revised:  Komen's policy disqualified Planned Parenthood due to a pending investigation on how Planned Parenthood spends and reports its money that is being conducted by Rep. (R-Florida).
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Original:  Stearns is investigating whether taxes are used to fund abortions through Planned Parenthood in his role as chairman of the Oversight and Investigations Subcommittee , which is under the umbrella of the House Energy and Commerce Committee .
Revised:  Stearns is investigating whether taxes are used to fund abortions through Planned Parenthood in his role as chairman of the , which is under the umbrella of the House Energy and Commerce Committee .
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Original:  Stearns is investigating whether taxes are used to fund abortions through Planned Parenthood in his role as chairman of the Oversight and Investigations Subcommittee , which is under the umbrella of the House Energy and Commerce Committee .
Revised:  Stearns is investigating whether taxes are used to fund abortions through Planned Parenthood in his role as chairman of the Oversight and Investigations Subcommittee , which is under the umbrella of the .
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Original:  Samuel J. Locklear III completes crosses the finish line of the annual Susan G. Komen Race for the Cure Cecile Richards , president of Planned Parenthood, said, "While this is deeply disturbing and disappointing, we want to assure women who rely on Planned Parenthood for breast care that we're still here for them, and we always will be.
Revised:  Samuel J. Locklear III completes crosses the finish line of the annual Susan G. Komen Race for the Cure , president of Planned Parenthood, said, "While this is deeply disturbing and disappointing, we want to assure women who rely on Planned Parenthood for breast care that we're still here for them, and we always will be.
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Original:  Komen's policy disqualified Planned Parenthood due to a pending investigation on how Planned Parenthood spends and reports its money that is being conducted by Rep. (R-Florida) .
Revised:  Komen's policy disqualified Planned Parenthood due to a pending investigation on how Planned Parenthood spends and reports its money that is being conducted by .
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Original:  The Komen institute cites an ongoing investigation but Planned Parenthood blame political pressures.
Revised:  The Komen institute cites an ongoing investigation , while Planned Parenthood blame political pressures.
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Original:   References  
Revised:  The Iraqi government has also told hospitals and emergency centers to staff extra people, indicating they expect an increase in civilian casualties. The interior minister also indicated that there was no garuntee that these measures would be 100\% effective. References 
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Original: January 22, 2005 Security measures are being increased in Iraq to protect voters in the upcoming election.
Revised:  Security measures are being increased in Iraq to protect voters in the upcoming election.
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Original:  The Interior Security Minister, Falah al-Naqib, announced some security measures that will be taken, including: URL URL UR
Revised:  The Interior Security Minister, Falah al-Naqib, announced some security measures that will be taken, including: URL URL UR
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Original:  As a winner-take-all state, Florida awarded all fifty of its delegates to Romney, pushing him ahead as the front-runner for the Republican Party nomination.
Revised:  As a winner-takes-all state, Florida awarded all fifty of its delegates to Romney, pushing him ahead as the front-runner for the Republican Party nomination.
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Original:  France 's appeal court, the , has upheld the findings of the lower courts in a 2009 fraud trial of the  .
Revised:  France 's appeal court, the , has upheld the findings of the lower courts in a 2009 of the . .
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Original: The conviction for fraud was based on claims by a former member of the group that she had been put under pressure to buy books, courses and " purification remedies ".
Revised: The conviction for fraud was based on claims by a former member of the group that she had been put under pressure to buy books, courses and " ".
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Original:  France, along with Belgium and Germany, does not grant the Church of Scientology—which was founded in 1954 by , a science fiction author—legal recognition as a religion like the United States does .
Revised:  France, along with Belgium and Germany, does not grant the Church of Scientology—which was founded in 1954 by , a science fiction author—legal recognition as a religion unlike the United States does .
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Original:  France, along with Belgium and Germany, does not grant the Church of Scientology—which was founded in 1954 by , a science fiction author—legal recognition as a religion like the United States does .
Revised:  France, along with Belgium and Germany, does not grant the Church of Scientology—which was founded in 1954 by , a science fiction author—legal recognition as a religion like the United States .
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Original:  France, along with Belgium and Germany, does not grant the Church of Scientology—which was founded in 1954 by , a science fiction author—legal recognition as a religion unlike the United States.
Revised:  France, along with Belgium and Germany, does not grant the Church of Scientology—which was founded in 1954 by , a author—legal recognition as a religion unlike the United States.
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Original: The 34-year-old Japanese Daisuke Enomoto will become the fourth space tourist.
Revised: Japanese entrepreneur Daisuke "Dice-K" Enomoto, 34, is set to become the fourth space tourist.
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