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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Critiques Kincaid's pointed style of writing is largely critiqued as an attack on colonialism and corruption that has been said to "back readers into the corner".
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Kincaid's pointed style of writing is largely critiqued as an attack on colonialism and corruption that has been said to "back readers into the corner".
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Original:  Moreover, this can tend to follow a seasonal pattern leaving the country vulnerable at certain times in the year.
Revised:  Moreover, this has tendency to follow a seasonal pattern leaving the country vulnerable at certain times in the year.
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Original:  In the first, the islands were inhabited by three successive Amerindian societies.
Revised:  In the first, the islands were inhabited by three sucessive Amerindian societies.
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Original:  The islands were neglected by the first wave of European colonisation, but were settled by England in 1632.
Revised:  The island was claimed by England, who settled the islands in 1632.
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Original:  Under  British control, the islands witnessed an influx of both Britons and African slaves  .
Revised:  Under English/ British control, the islands witnessed an influx of both Britons and African slaves .
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Original:  Pre-Columbian settlements (2900 BC–17th century) Antigua was first settled by pre-agricultural Amerindians known as "Archaic People" (although they are commonly, but erroneously known in Antigua as Siboney, a pre-ceramic Cuban people).
Revised:  Early history (2900 BC–17th century) Antigua was first settled by pre-agricultural Amerindians known as "Archaic People" (although they are commonly, but erroneously known in Antigua as Siboney, a pre-ceramic Cuban people).
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Original:  They also cultivated various other foods including : corn sweet potatoes (white with firmer flesh than the bright orange "sweet potato" used in the United States)chiles guavatobacco cotton Some of the vegetables listed, such as corn and sweet potatoes, still play an important role in Antiguan cuisine.
Revised:  They also cultivated various other foods including corn, sweet potatoes (white with firmer flesh than the bright orange "sweet potato" used in the United States)chiles guavatobacco cotton Some of the vegetables listed, such as corn and sweet potatoes, still play an important role in Antiguan cuisine.
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Original:  They also cultivated various other foods including : corn sweet potatoes (white with firmer flesh than the bright orange "sweet potato" used in the United States)chiles guavatobacco cotton Some of the vegetables listed, such as corn and sweet potatoes, still play an important role in Antiguan cuisine.
Revised:  They also cultivated various other foods including : corn sweet potatoes (white variety), guava, tobacco, and cotton. Some of the vegetables listed, such as corn and sweet potatoes, still play an important role in Antiguan cuisine.
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Original:  European Colonization (1632–1981)  Christopher Columbus sighted islands in 1493 during his second voyage naming the larger one Santa Maria de la Antigua.
Revised:  European colonization (1632–1981) Christopher Columbus sighted islands in 1493 during his second voyage naming the larger one Santa Maria de la Antigua.
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Original:  Admiral Lord Horatio Nelson commanded the British fleet for much of this time, and made himself unpopular with local merchants by enforcing the Navigation Act, a British ruling that only British-registered ships could trade with British colonies.
Revised:  Admiral Horatio Nelson commanded the British fleet for much of this time, and made himself unpopular with local merchants by enforcing the Navigation Act, a British ruling that only British-registered ships could trade with British colonies.
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Original:  Political development File:Antigua 8 Cent Stamp 1953.jpg|190px|Postage stamp with portrait of Queen Elizabeth II, 1953   With all others in the British Empire, Antiguan slaves were emancipated in 1834, but remained economically dependent upon the plantation owners.
Revised:  File:Antigua 8 Cent Stamp 1953.jpg|190px|Postage stamp with portrait of Queen Elizabeth II, 1953 With all others in the British Empire, Antiguan slaves were emancipated in 1834, but remained economically dependent upon the plantation owners.
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Original:  Economic development in Antigua from colonial times leading up to independence When the Europeans came to Antigua, much like they did in America, they began a plantation system.
Revised:  When the Europeans came to Antigua, much like they did in America, they began a plantation system.
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Original:  Prior to European colonization, the lasds encompassing present-day Antigua and Barbuda were inhabited by three sucessive Amerindian societies.
Revised:  Prior to European colonization, the lands encompassing present-day Antigua and Barbuda were inhabited by three sucessive Amerindian societies.
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Original: The Irish were first sent to the island as indentured and unpaid servants by Oliver Cromwell during the early to mid 17th century.
Revised: The Irish were first sent to the island as indentured and unpaid servants by Oliver Cromwell during the mid 17th century.
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Original:  Irish Indentured servant were replaced by African slaves in the mid to late 17th century as they were more suited to working in the sun and heat.
Revised:  Irish indentured servants were replaced by African slaves in the mid to late 17th century as they were more suited to working in the sun and heat.
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Original: Activists from West Bengal Category:Indian women scholars Category:Scholars from West Bengal Category:Indian academic administrators Category:Women academic administrators Category:21st-century Indian social scientists Category:21st-century Indian women scientists Category:21st-century Indian lawyers Category:Social workers from Delhi Category:21st-century women writers Category:Women legal scholars Category:20th-century women educators Category:Indian expatriates in the United Kingd
Revised: Activists from West Bengal Category:Indian women scholars Category:Scholars from West Bengal Category:Indian academic administrators Category:Women academic administrators Category:21st-century Indian social scientists Category:21st-century Indian women scientists Category:21st-century Indian lawyers Category:Social workers from Delhi Category:21st-century women writers Category:Women legal scholars Category:20th-century women educators Category:Indian expatriates in the United Kingdom Category:Indian expatriates in the United Stat
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Original:          Equality and non-discrimination WSSCC advocates for equality, human rights and non-discrimination as central to ensuring access to safe water supply, adequate sanitation and good hygiene for all.
Revised:  Scope Equality and non-discrimination WSSCC advocates for equality, human rights and non-discrimination as central to ensuring access to safe water supply, adequate sanitation and good hygiene for all.
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Original: The GSF was established by the Water Supply and Sanitation Collaborative Council (WSSCC ) to boost financing to countries with high needs for improved sanitation.
Revised: The GSF was established by WSSCC to boost financing to countries with high needs for improved sanitation.
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Original: Partnerships Key collaborating partners with WSSCC include WaterAid, Sanitation and Water for All, Sustainable Sanitation Alliance (SuSanA) and UNICEF, among others.
Revised: Partnerships Key collaborating partners with WSSCC include WaterAid, the Sustainable Sanitation Alliance (SuSanA) and UNICEF, among others.
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Original:  In 2020, WSSCC announced a stronger collaboration with SuSanA by merging their Community of Practice group into the SuSanA Discussion Forum   .
Revised:  In 2020, WSSCC announced a stronger collaboration with SuSanA by merging their Community of Practice group into the SuSanA Discussion Forum . .
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Original:  WSSCC facilitates multi-stakeholder collaboration around sanitation and contributes to the international community's broader goals of poverty eradication, health and environmental improvement, gender equality and long-term social and economic development.
Revised:  WSSCC facilitates collaboration amongst a range of stakeholders around sanitation. It also contributes to the international community's broader goals of poverty eradication, health and environmental improvement, gender equality and long-term social and economic development.
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Original:  WSSCC facilitates multi-stakeholder collaboration around sanitation and contributes to the international community's broader goals of poverty eradication, health and environmental improvement, gender equality and long-term social and economic development.
Revised:  WSSCC facilitates multi-stakeholder collaboration around sanitation and contributes to the international community's goals of poverty eradication, health and environmental improvement, gender equality and long-term social and economic development.
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Original:  A National Public Radio article highlighted that many policy makers often admit that they had never considered questions around menstruation before   .
Revised:  A National Public Radio article highlighted that many policy makers often admit that they had never considered questions around menstruation before . .
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Original: Water Supply and Sanitation Collaborative Council (WSSCC) is a United Nations-hosted organization dedicated to advancing Sustainable Development Goal 6, Target 6.2 on sanitation and hygiene.
Revised: Water Supply and Sanitation Collaborative Council (WSSCC) is a United Nations-hosted organization contributing to Sustainable Development Goal 6, Target 6.2 on sanitation and hygiene.
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Original:  WSSCC advocates for improved sanitation and hygiene, paying special attention to the needs of women, girls and people in vulnerable situations.
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Original:  Water Supply and Sanitation Collaborative Council (WSSCC)  is a United Nations-hosted organization contributing to Sustainable Development Goal 6, Target 6.2 on sanitation and hygiene.
Revised:  Water Supply and Sanitation Collaborative Council (WSSCC) ) is a United Nations-hosted organization contributing to Sustainable Development Goal 6, Target 6.2 on sanitation and hygiene.
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Original:  each contributed to literary criticism in separate ways, with the latter being a sub-branch of Critical theory.
Revised:  each contributed to literary criticism in separate ways, with the latter being a sub-branch of critical theory.
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Original:   Summer – Romance .
Revised:  The seasons are associated with narrative parallels: Summer – Romance .
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Original:   Summer – Romance .
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Original:  Autumn – Tragedy .
Revised:  Autumn – tragedy .
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Original:  Winter – Irony/Satire .
Revised:  Winter – irony or satire .
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Original:  Spring – Comedy .
Revised:  Spring – comedy .
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Original: Examples of archetypes in literature Femme Fatale: A female character type who brings upon catastrophic and disastrous events.
Revised: Examples in literature Femme Fatale: A female character type who brings upon catastrophic and disastrous events.
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Original:  This archetype may create a shared imaginary which is defined by many stereotypes that have not separated themselves from the traditional, biological, religious and mythical framework  
Revised:  This archetype may create a shared imaginary which is defined by many stereotypes that have not separated themselves from the traditional, biological, religious and mythical framework . 
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Original: Archetypal literary criticism is a type of critical theory that interprets a text by focusing on recurring myths and archetypes (from the Greek archē, "beginning", and typos, "imprint") in the narrative, symbols, images, and character types in literary works.
Revised: Archetypal literary criticism is a type of analytical theory that interprets a text by focusing on recurring myths and archetypes (from the Greek archē, "beginning", and typos, "imprint") in the narrative, symbols, images, and character types in literary works.
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Original:  each contributed to literary criticism in separate ways , with the latter being a sub-branch of critical theory .
Revised:  each contributed to literary criticism in separate ways .
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Original:  Majority of private dating take place on the internet. 
Revised:  Majority of private dating take place on the internet. With the advent of the online solutions like Tinder and Badoo, scamming and manipulations between the parties have increased. The disadvantages of this type of dating now include stalking and constant need of personal possession
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Original:  Erin Hannon and Pete Miller start dating but keep their relationship secret from Andy Bernard, but Erin had already broken up with Andy Scandal (TV series): Liza Weil secretly dates Billy Chambers Zoey 101 (TV series) : Logan Reese and Quinn Pensky hid their relationship, because they did not want to hinder their high school reputation, but they later announced their relationship at prom.
Revised:  Erin Hannon and Pete Miller start dating but keep their relationship secret from Andy Bernard, but Erin had already broken up with Andy Scandal (TV series): Liza Weil secretly dates Billy Chambers Zoey 101 : Logan Reese and Quinn Pensky hid their relationship, because they did not want to hinder their high school reputation, but they later announced their relationship at prom.
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Original:  IEBC Candidate Party Votes Comment Daniel Waithaka Mwangi TNA 162,418 Winner David Mwaniki Ngugi GNU 19,561 Peter Mwangi Gathimba NARC 55,896 Rejected Votes 2,313 Total Cast Votes 240,188
Revised:  Candidate Party Votes Comment Daniel Waithaka Mwangi TNA 162,418 Winner David Mwaniki Ngugi GNU 19,561 Peter Mwangi Gathimba NARC 55,896 Rejected Votes 2,313 Total Cast Votes 240,188
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Original: Professional career Accountancy Upon graduating from the University of Nairobi, Mr. Waithaka Mwangi joined the Ministry of Co-operative Development in 1972 as a lecturer at the Co-operative College, Karen.
Revised:  Accountancy Upon graduating from the University of Nairobi, Mr. Waithaka Mwangi joined the Ministry of Co-operative Development in 1972 as a lecturer at the Co-operative College, Karen.
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Original:  See also feminism masculinism masculism
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Original: The term femininism (also capitalized as Femininism ) is related to the adjective feminine .
Revised: Femininism is the promotion or appreciation of femininity or "womanliness", and is the direct counterpart to masculinism .
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Original:  Unlike the similar-sounding feminism, femininism has a distinct meaning associated with gender differences rather than gender equality, though historically it has also been used to mean feminism.
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Original:  See also feminism masculinism masculism References 1896: Natural Science - Volume 9 - Page 154 "The subject of infantlism, femininism, and the hermaphrodites of antiquity, has been carefully studied by Mr. Henry Meirge in l'Anthropologie for 1895.
Revised:  Feminism is a similar term and sometimes used interchangeably with femininism, but more specifically refers to the advocacy of the women's rights and interests of women and girls with the goal of gender equality, and is the direct counterpart to masculism. References 1896: Natural Science - Volume 9 - Page 154 "The subject of infantlism, femininism, and the hermaphrodites of antiquity, has been carefully studied by Mr. Henry Meirge in l'Anthropologie for 1895.
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Original:  and whose abnormal and often morbid "pleasure in saying 'no'" (as Nietzsche puts it) is, after all, alas! so very necessary in this world of quite normally stupid and normally selfish and normally virtuous "pleasure in saying 'yes'"  A BRIEF HISTORY OF EARLY CHINESE PHILOSOPHY.
Revised:  and whose abnormal and often morbid "pleasure in saying 'no'" (as Nietzsche puts it) is, after all, alas! so very necessary in this world of quite normally stupid and normally selfish and normally virtuous "pleasure in saying 'yes'" </ref> A BRIEF HISTORY OF EARLY CHINESE PHILOSOPHY.
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Original: Ludeke has over 30 years of experience in coaching, haven started in 1987 coaching Hoerskool Vorentoe before a brief sting caching English clubs.
Revised: Ludeke has over 30 years of experience in coaching, haven started in 1987 coaching Hoërskool Vorentoe before a brief sting caching English clubs.
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Original: Frans Ludeke is a South African rugby union coach, formerly coach of the and the Cats in Super Rugby.
Revised: Frans Ludeke is a South African rugby union coach, formerly coach of the and the in Super Rugby.
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Original:  He additionally coach the Blue Bulls and the Golden Lions in the South African Currie Cup URL In July 2015, it was announced Ludeke would join the Flying Fijians coaching set-up ahead of the 2015 Rugby World Cup, working with the forwards and lineouts and kickoffs.
Revised:  He additionally coach the Blue Bulls and the Golden Lions in the South African Currie Cup URL In July 2015, it was announced Ludeke would join the Fiji national team coaching set-up ahead of the 2015 Rugby World Cup, working with the forwards and lineouts and kickoffs.
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Original: Ludeke has over 30 years of experience in coaching, haven started in 1987 coaching Hoërskool Vorentoe before a brief sting caching English clubs.
Revised: Ludeke has over 30 years of experience in coaching, having started in 1987 coaching Hoërskool Vorentoe before a brief sting caching English clubs.
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Original: Ludeke has over 30 years of experience in coaching, haven started in 1987 coaching Hoërskool Vorentoe before a brief sting caching English clubs.
Revised: Ludeke has over 30 years of experience in coaching, haven started in 1987 coaching Hoërskool Vorentoe before a brief sting coaching English clubs.
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Original: Ludeke new Lions coach He became the Cats head coach in 2001 ahead of the 2002 Super 12 season, but was sacked following a very poor season, seeing the Cars finish second to last with just 1 win.
Revised: Ludeke new Lions coach He became the Cats head coach in 2001 ahead of the 2002 Super 12 season, but was sacked following a very poor season, seeing the Cats finish second to last with just 1 win.
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Original:  To calculate the basic reproduction number by using a next-generation matrix, the whole population is divided into compartments in which , infected compartments.
Revised:  To calculate the basic reproduction number by using a next-generation matrix, the whole population is divided into compartments in which there are infected compartments.
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Original: In epidemiology, the next-generation matrix is a method used to derive the basic reproduction number, for a compartmental model of the spread of infectious diseases.
Revised: In epidemiology, the next-generation matrix is used to derive the basic reproduction number, for a compartmental model of the spread of infectious diseases.
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Original:  Now, the epidemic model is , where In the above equations, represents the rate of appearance of new infections in compartment . represents the rate of transfer of individuals into compartment by all other means, and represents the rate of transfer of individuals out of compartment .
Revised:  Now, the epidemic model is , where In the above equations, represents the rate of appearance of new infections in compartment . represents the rate of transfer of individuals into compartment by all other means, and represents the rate of transfer of individuals out of compartment .
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Original:  The largest eigenvalue or spectral radius of is the basic reproduction number of the model.
Revised:  The largest modulus of the eigenvalues or spectral radius of is the basic reproduction number of the model.
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Original: Visual music, sometimes called colour music, refers to the use of musical structures in visual imagery , which can also include silent films or silent Lumia work.
Revised: Visual music, sometimes called colour music, refers to the creation of a visual analogue to musical form by adapting musical structures for visual composition , which can also include silent films or silent Lumia work.
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Original:  On Painting To associate languages of painting to music by those who written from theory to practice and from words to music.
Revised:  To associate languages of painting to music by those who written from theory to practice and from words to music.
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Original: Autom@tedVisualMusic, visualmusic software, creates images and sounds in relation to precise correspondences sound-symbol-color, producing multiple variations, written by Sergio Maltagliati, from experiences of the visual HomeArt programs designed by Pietro Grossi in the '80s, in the language BBC BASIC. Sound Life 3.01 autom@tedVisualMusiC software (screenshot)
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Original:  His grandson, Spencer Heath MacCallum, popularized and expounded on his ideas, most notably in his book The Art of CommunitySpencer MacCallum: Looking Back and Forward, Lewrockwell.com, December 19, 2003.
Revised:  His grandson, Spencer Heath MacCallum, popularized and expounded on his ideas, most notably in his book The Art of Community.Spencer MacCallum: Looking Back and Forward, Lewrockwell.com, December 19, 2003.
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Original:  History EDC is often cited as having its origins in another class of software— remote data entry (RDE) that surfaced in the life sciences market in the late 1980s and early 1990s.
Revised:  History EDC is often cited as having its origins in remote data entry (RDE) that surfaced in the life sciences market in the late 1980s and early 1990s.
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Original:  History EDC is often cited as having its origins in another class of software— remote data entry (RDE) that surfaced in the life sciences market in the late 1980s and early 1990s.
Revised:  History EDC is often cited as having its origins in another class of software— remote data entry (RDE) software, which surfaced in the life sciences market in the late 1980s and early 1990s.
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Original:  However, its origins actually begin in the mid-1970s with a contract research organization known then as Institute for Biological Research and Development (IBRD). Dr. Richard Nicholand Joe Bollert contracted with Abbott Pharmaceuticals for the IBRD 'network' of Clinical Investigators to each have a computer and 'directly' enter clinical study data to the IBRD mainframe.
Revised:  However, its origins might be tracked to a contract research organization known then as Institute for Biological Research and Development (IBRD). Dr. Richard Nicholand Joe Bollert contracted with Abbott Pharmaceuticals for the IBRD 'network' of Clinical Investigators to each have a computer and 'directly' enter clinical study data to the IBRD mainframe.
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