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Original:  Jimmy Durben of Glynn County's coroner office said: "It was the worst scene I have ever witnessed in my 17 year history at the coroner's office ." It is a chilling fact that the plantation's website boasts: "You'll be proud to call this home .
Revised:  Jimmy Durben of Glynn County's coroner office said: "It was the worst scene I have ever witnessed in my 17 year history at the coroner's office ." .
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Original:  Glynn County Police Chief Matt Doering had said that this was " the worst incident that he had dealt with in his 25 years of work" .
Revised:  Glynn County Police Chief Matt Doering said that in 25 years, this was the worst incident that he had dealt with in his 25 years of work" .
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Original:  Glynn County Police Chief Matt Doering had said that this was " the worst incident that he had dealt with in his 25 years of work" .
Revised:  Glynn County Police Chief Matt Doering had said that this was " the worst incident of its kind he had ever handled .
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Original:  At the moment, we are treating this case as a murder suicide - that is to say that we believe that the man murdered the little girl and then committed suicide  ." A Jet filling station.
Revised:  This is a tragic incident for two families and we are working closely with them as part of our investigation." ." A Jet filling station.
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Original:  The Dalai Lama in 2007 The spiritual leader of Tibet, the Dalai Lama  has begun his visit to Taiwan.
Revised:  The Dalai Lama in 2007 The spiritual leader of Tibet, the Dalai Lama , has begun his visit to Taiwan.
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Original:  When the Dalai Lama arrived at the train station, scuffles broke out between supporters and police, according to the Associated Press.
Revised:  Upon the Dalai Lama arrived at the train station, scuffles broke out between supporters and police, according to the Associated Press.
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Original:  When the Dalai Lama arrived at the train station, scuffles broke out between supporters and police, according to the Associated Press.
Revised:  When the Dalai Lama 's arrival at the train station, scuffles broke out between supporters and police, according to the Associated Press.
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Original: As he boarded his flight yesterday, the Dalai Lama emphasised his visit was not of a political nature  instead he was invited by the Tibetan people.
Revised: As he boarded his flight yesterday, the Dalai Lama emphasised his visit was not of a political nature and instead he was invited by the Tibetan people.
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Original:  He was one of the biggest stars of the 1960s, until he was fired from London Weekend Television in    1970 
Revised:  He was one of the biggest stars of the 1960s, until he was fired from London Weekend Television in 1970. 1970 
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Original:  He has been cited as the first example of a television superstar, and the term "Simon Dee Syndrome" has come to be used to describe those who are better known for their fall from fame  than for their rise to it.
Revised:  He has been cited as the first example of a television superstar, and the term "Simon Dee Syndrome" has come to be used to describe those who are better known for their fall from fame , than for their rise to it.
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Original:  His career began on the pirate radio station Radio Caroline in 1964, before he was given a job on the BBC Light Programme in 1964.
Revised:  's career began on the pirate radio station Radio Caroline in 1964, before he was given a job on the BBC Light Programme in 1964.
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Original:  He was then given his own television talk show, Dee Time.
Revised:  Dee was then given his own television talk show, Dee Time.
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Original:  He was later sent to prison for failure to pay his rates and drifted into relative obscurity  
Revised:  He was later sent to prison for failure to pay his rates and drifted into relative obscurity . 
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Original:  Dee was diagnosed with cancer only weeks ago, and could not be treated .
Revised:  Dee 's diagnosis of cancer came only weeks ago, and could not be treated .
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Original:  Dee was diagnosed with cancer only weeks ago, and could not be treated .
Revised:  Dee was diagnosed with cancer only weeks ago, but was already in an untreatable stage .
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Original: British former television and radio presenter Simon Dee (real name Cyril Henty-Dodd) died of bone marrow cancer today.
Revised: Former British television and radio presenter Simon Dee (real name Cyril Henty-Dodd) died of bone marrow cancer today.
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Original: File photo of Kimi Räikkönen Circuit de Spa-Francorchamps Ferrari driver Kimi Räikkönen won the FIA Formula One 2009 ING Belgian Grand Prix at the Circuit de Spa-Francorchamps, Spa, Belgium.
Revised: File photo of Kimi Räikkönen 
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Original: Jenson Button not scored any points and still leads the championship with 72.
Revised: Jenson Button did not score any points but still leads the championship with 72.
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Original: Jenson Button not scored any points and still leads the championship with 72.
Revised: Jenson Button not scored any points and still leads the championships with 72.
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Original:  Rubens Barrichello gained 2 points and is as close as 16 to Button.
Revised:  Rubens Barrichello earned 2 points and is as close as 16 to Button.
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Original:  Rubens Barrichello gained 2 points and is as close as 16 to Button.
Revised:  Rubens Barrichello gained 2 points and is within 16 to Button.
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Original:  Rubens Barrichello gained 2 points and is as close as 16 to Button.
Revised:  Rubens Barrichello gained 2 points and is as close as 16 of Button.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel is now only 3 points after Barrichello and Mark Webber still with 51.5 points.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel is now only 3 points behind Barrichello and Mark Webber still with 51.5 points.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel is now only 3 points after Barrichello and Mark Webber still with 51.5 points.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel is now only 3 points after Barrichello and Mark Webber still has 51.5 points.
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Original:  When the pace car turned off the light and the race restarted Kimi overtook the pole-sitter Giancarlo Fisichella in Eau Rouge, who drove his Force India to the second place    .
Revised:  When the pace car turned off the lights and the race restarted Kimi overtook the pole-sitter Giancarlo Fisichella in Eau Rouge, who drove his Force India to the second place .
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Original:  When the pace car turned off the light and the race restarted Kimi overtook the pole-sitter Giancarlo Fisichella in Eau Rouge, who drove his Force India to the second place    .
Revised:  When the pace car turned off the light and the race restarted Kimi overtook the pole-sitter Giancarlo Fisichella in Eau Rouge, who drove his Force India to the second place . .
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Original:  Wikinews is a nonprofit independent news site run by the non-profit Wikimedia Foundation.
Revised:  Wikinews is a nonprofit independent news site run by the non-profit Wikimedia 
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Original: A couple is missing on the Gold Coast in Queensland and countless more are trapped in cars all over the region . State Emergency Services (SES) workers are currently preparing to evacuate a number of nursing homes in the suburbs of Southport and Burleigh.
Revised: A couple is missing on the Gold Coast in Queensland . State Emergency Services (SES) workers are currently preparing to evacuate a number of nursing homes in the suburbs of Southport and Burleigh.
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Original:  A couple is missing on the Gold Coast in Queensland . State Emergency Services (SES) workers are currently preparing to evacuate a number of nursing homes in the suburbs of Southport and Burleigh .
Revised:  A couple is missing on the in . State Emergency Services (SES) workers are currently preparing to evacuate a number of nursing homes in the suburbs of Southport and Burleigh .
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Original:  A couple is missing on the Gold Coast in Queensland . State Emergency Services (SES) workers are currently preparing to evacuate a number of nursing homes in the suburbs of Southport and Burleigh .
Revised:  A couple is missing on the Gold Coast in Queensland . State Emergency Services (SES) workers are currently preparing to evacuate a number of nursing homes in the suburbs of and .
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Original:  Further south the city of Lismore has been inudated .
Revised:  Further south the city of Lismore has been inundated .
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Original:  A recently contructed levy has held back the waters of the Wilson river , protecting the town's central business district
Revised:  A recently constructed levy has held back the waters of the Wilson river , protecting the town's central business district
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Original:  A hurricane watch may be required for portions of the southern Baja California peninsula later today or tonight.  
Revised:  A hurricane watch may be required for portions of the southern Baja California peninsula later today or tonight. " 
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Original:  Hurricane Jimena has quickly intensified into a powerful Category [[ ]]  4 hurricane off the coast of Mexico in the Pacific Ocean.
Revised:  Hurricane Jimena has quickly intensified into a powerful Category [[ |]] 4 hurricane off the coast of Mexico in the Pacific Ocean.
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Original:  Hurricane Jimena has quickly intensified into a powerful Category [[ ]]  4 hurricane off the coast of Mexico in the Pacific Ocean.
Revised:  Hurricane Jimena has quickly intensified into a powerful Category [[ ]] 4 
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Original: Dave Roberts, a forecaster for the National Hurricane Center (NHC) said "There's a good chance this system could be a Category 5 in the next 24 hours".
Revised: Dave Roberts, a forecaster for the (NHC) said "There's a good chance this system could be a Category 5 in the next 24 hours".
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Original:  The storm is expected to move northwestward, threatening the Baja California peninsula over coming days.
Revised:  The storm is expected to move northwestward, threatening the peninsula over coming days.
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Original: Mateja Kežman (official web site) Serbia and Montenegro international, Mateja Kežman, will sign a three year contract with Atlético  Madrid today.
Revised: Mateja Kežman (official web site) Serbia and Montenegro international, Mateja Kežman, will sign a three year contract with Atlético de Madrid today.
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Original:  Most of the organisation's other members were sentenced to lengthy jail sentences for this and other killings, but the case against Becker in Buback's slaying was dropped for lack of evidence, and she was later pardoned from her convictions in other crimes    
Revised:  Most of the organisation's other members were sentenced to lengthy jail sentences for this and other killings, but the case against Becker in Buback's slaying was dropped for lack of evidence, and she was later pardoned from her convictions in other crimes . 
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Original: The 57-year-old was a member of the Red Army Faction (RAF) , a communist terror group that hoped to trigger a worker's revolution.
Revised: The 57-year-old was a member of the Red Army Faction , a communist terror group that hoped to trigger a worker's revolution.
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Original: The 57-year-old was a member of the Red Army Faction, a communist terror group that hoped to trigger a worker' s revolution.
Revised: The 57-year-old was a member of the Red Army Faction, a communist terror group that hoped to trigger a workers' revolution.
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Original:  The FIA would only confirm a probe into "alleged incidents at a previous Formula One world championship event    .
Revised:  The FIA would only confirm a probe into "alleged incidents at a previous Formula One world championship event ." .
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Original:  If I hadn't crashed I would have been lucky with the safety car later in the race...  
Revised:  If I hadn't crashed I would have been lucky with the safety car later in the race... " 
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Original:  By accident or design, Piquet did indeed crash during the race, which benifited teamate Fernando Alonso, who had just pitted early for fuel.
Revised:  By accident or design, Piquet did indeed crash during the race, which benefited teamate Fernando Alonso, who had just pitted early for fuel.
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Original: The discovery dates to June 2010 when when Dr Fukun Liu from China's noticed an apparent tidal disruption coming from a galaxy known as J120136. XMM-Newton was tasked to investigate, as was NASA's .
Revised: The discovery dates to June 2010 when Dr Fukun Liu from China's noticed an apparent tidal disruption coming from a galaxy known as J120136. XMM-Newton was tasked to investigate, as was NASA's .
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Original:  Called 'tidal disruption events', items being consumed by black holes and giving off x-rays as they do are the primary method of spotting black holes.
Revised:  Called 'tidal disruption events', items being consumed by black holes and giving off X-rays as they do are the primary method of spotting black holes.
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Original:  Fisherman complain of constant harassment from the Israeli navy which prevents boats from going more than five miles off the coast of Gaza  
Revised:  Fisherman complain of constant harassment from the Israeli navy which prevents boats from going more than five miles off the coast of Gaza . 
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Original: At least one person was hurt when the Israeli navy opened fire on Gazan fishing vessels fishing off the coast of the besieged Gaza Strip today .
Revised: At least one person was injured when the Israeli navy opened fire on Gazan fishing vessels fishing off the coast of the besieged Gaza Strip today .
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Original:  An Israeli military spokeswoman confirmed that the Israeli navy had opened fire on fishing vessel off the coast of Beit Lahia in Northern Gaza after the fishing boats, "  violated security boundaries off the coast of the Gaza Strip ... out of the permitted fishing zone .
Revised:  An Israeli military spokeswoman confirmed that the Israeli navy had opened fire on fishing vessel off the coast of Beit Lahia in Northern Gaza after the fishing boats, " violated security boundaries off the coast of the Gaza Strip ... out of the permitted fishing zone ,
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Original:  Yesterday, the Israeli army bombed a tunnel in Gaza that the military says is used to smuggle in terrorists  .
Revised:  Yesterday, the Israeli army bombed a tunnel in Gaza that they say was used to smuggle in terrorists .
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Original:  20 people were reported to be on the boats when they were targeted.
Revised:  Twenty people were reported to be on the boats when they were targeted.
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Original:  As Belgian citizens, the two Rwandans were subject to the new law  
Revised:  As Belgian citizens, the two Rwandans were subject to the new law . 
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Original:  Estimates place the number killed at up to one million  
Revised:  Estimates place the number killed at up to one million . 
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Original:  Major perpetrators are being tried at four courts of the International Criminal Tribunal in Tanzania, while in Rwanda Gacaca courts are reaching the end of the investigation stage, after which communities will collectively decide on guilt and punishment at weekly Gacaca sessions throughout the summer  
Revised:  Major perpetrators are being tried at four courts of the International Criminal Tribunal in Tanzania, while in Rwanda Gacaca courts are reaching the end of the investigation stage, after which communities will collectively decide on guilt and punishment at weekly Gacaca sessions throughout the summer . 
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Original: With the War in Afghanistan approaching its eighth year, the newly appointed U.S. ground commander in Afghanistan, General (Gen.) Stanley McChrystal, is making his case for his strategy in the recent submission of a classified recommendations to U.S. President Barack Obama.
Revised: With the War in Afghanistan approaching its eighth year, the newly appointed U.S. ground commander in Afghanistan, General (Gen.) Stanley McChrystal, is making his case for a new strategy in the recent submission of a classified recommendations to U.S. President Barack Obama.
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Original: With the War in Afghanistan approaching its eighth year, the newly appointed U.S. ground commander in Afghanistan, General (Gen.) Stanley McChrystal, is making his case for his strategy in the recent submission of a classified recommendations to U.S. President Barack Obama.
Revised: With the War in Afghanistan approaching its eighth year, the newly appointed U.S. ground commander in Afghanistan, General (Gen.) Stanley McChrystal, is making his case for his strategy in the recent submission of classified recommendations to U.S. President Barack Obama.
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Original:  The main buzz surrounds Gen.
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Original:  McChrystal's recommendation for troop levels in the country of which he is expected to recommend an increase at the end of this year.
Revised:  McChrystal's recommendation for troop levels in the country of which he is expected to recommend an increase by the end of this year.
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Original:  Egon Ramms, the senior NATO Commander before going to U.S. Secretary of Defense Robert Gates and on to the President.
Revised:  Egon Ramms, the senior North Atlantic Treaty Organization Commander before going to U.S. Secretary of Defense Robert Gates and on to the President.
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Original:  Although the report did not include requests for troop increases, it is possible that such a request will occur in the coming weeks or shortly thereafter.
Revised:  Although the report does not include requests for troop increases, it is possible that such a request will occur in the coming weeks or shortly thereafter.
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Original:  Gen. McChrystal has widely commented on the situation stating that "The situation in Afghanistan is serious, but success is achievable and demands a revised implementation strategy, commitment and resolve, and increased unity of effort".
Revised:  Gen. McChrystal stated that "The situation in Afghanistan is serious, but success is achievable and demands a revised implementation strategy, commitment and resolve, and increased unity of effort".
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Original:  The report will likely be the first step in what will be many of significant changes in U.S. strategy
Revised:  This report will likely be the first step in what will be many of significant changes in U.S. strategy
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Original:  Nigeria was suspended in 1995  but was later re-instated.
Revised:  Nigeria was suspended in 1995 , but was later re-instated.
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Original:  The Commonwealth had previously suspended the country for 18 months in 2000.
Revised:  The Commonwealth had previously suspended the country for eighteen months in 2000.
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Original: The South Pacific island  of Fiji has been fully suspended by the Commonwealth after they refused to call elections by next year.
Revised: The South Pacific island nation of Fiji has been fully suspended by the Commonwealth after they refused to call elections by next year.
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Original: The South Pacific island  of Fiji has been fully suspended by the Commonwealth after they refused to call elections by next year.
Revised: The South Pacific island of Fiji has been fully suspended by the Commonwealth of Nations after it refused to call elections by next year.
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Original:  Secretary General Kamalesh Sharma said the country failed to show "progress to democracy".
Revised:  Secretary-General Kamalesh Sharma said the country failed to show "progress to democracy".
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Original: Fiji failed to reach the deadline of September 1st to announce a date for elections to be held in the country.
Revised: Fiji failed to reach the September 1 deadline to announce a date for elections to be held in the country.
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Original:  They had already been suspended from the Pacific Islands Forum and some European aid has been cut off.
Revised:  Fiji has already been suspended from the Pacific Islands Forum and some European aid has been cut off.
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Original:  Secretary-General Kamalesh Sharma said the country failed to show "progress to democracy" .
Revised:  Secretary-General Kamalesh Sharma said the country failed to show progress towards democracy .
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Original:  This is only the second time a country  has been suspended  fully by the Commonwealth . Nigeria was suspended in 1995, but was later re-instated .
Revised:  This is only the second time a country has been suspended fully by the Commonwealth . Nigeria was suspended in 1995, but later re-instated .
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Original: Twitter has gained a lot of popularity over the course of this year due to an upsurge in celebrities using the website like Stephen Fry, Johnathan Ross, John Cleese, Lily Allen, Chris Moyles and Calvin Harris.
Revised: Twitter has gained popularity over the course of this year due to an upsurge in celebrities using the website like Stephen Fry, Johnathan Ross, John Cleese, Lily Allen, Chris Moyles and Calvin Harris.
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Original: Twitter has gained popularity over the course of this year due to an upsurge in celebrities using the website like Stephen Fry, Johnathan Ross, John Cleese, Lily Allen, Chris Moyles and Calvin Harris , w:Josiah Schillinger Josiah Schillenger .
Revised: Twitter has gained popularity over the course of this year due to an upsurge in celebrities using the website like Stephen Fry, Johnathan Ross, John Cleese, Lily Allen, Chris Moyles and Calvin Harris .
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Original:  Some areas of the region are already beginning to experience the storm's effects   
Revised:  Some areas of the region are already beginning to experience the storm's effects . 
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Original:  He reported 35 emergency shelters have been prepared to accommodate up to 30,000 evacuees   
Revised:  He reported 35 emergency shelters have been prepared to accommodate up to 30,000 evacuees . 
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Original:  He reported  35 emergency shelters have been prepared to accommodate up to 30,000 evacuees.
Revised:  He reported that 35 emergency shelters have been prepared to accommodate up to 30,000 evacuees.
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Original:  Remember not to focus on the exact track since dangerous impacts extend some distance from the center.  
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Original:  A firefighter rode through the streets of Colonia Obrera, a small settlement, sending the following alert to residents via a loudspeaker: "For the safety of you and your family, board a vehicle or head to the nearest shelter"  
Revised:  A firefighter rode through the streets of Colonia Obrera, a small settlement, sending the following alert through a loudspeaker: "For the safety of you and your family, board a vehicle or head to the nearest shelter" 
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Original:  The biggest threat, as always, is anyone that remains in the lowest portions of the land, near the coastline are at risk from drowning obviously from very high waves and potential storm surge a storm like this represents.  &  
Revised:  The biggest threat, as always, is anyone that remains in the lowest portions of the land, near the coastline are at risk from drowning obviously from very high waves and potential storm surge a storm like this represents. " & 
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