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Original:  The first accident on Thursday involved a wooden ferry near Limbones island colliding with a large fishing boat, the Nathalia.
Revised:  The first accident on Thursday involved a wooden ferry near Limbones Island colliding with a large fishing boat, the Nathalia.
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Original: David Taylor, the 63 year old Labour Co-operative British Member of Parliament  for North West Leicestershire, died yesterday from a sudden heart attack whilst walking in Calke Abbey, Derbyshire with his family.
Revised: David Taylor, the 63 year old Labour Co-operative British Member of Parliament (MP) for North West Leicestershire, died yesterday from a sudden heart attack whilst walking in Calke Abbey, Derbyshire with his family.
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Original:  Kerry McCarthy, Labour MP for Bristol East  described him on her blog as 'one of those MPs who could be described as a true parliamentarian'.
Revised:  Kerry McCarthy, Labour MP for Bristol East , described him on her blog as 'one of those MPs who could be described as a true parliamentarian'.
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Original:   Adbulmutallab said to the FBI that he met with a radical Yemeni cleric he talked with online.
Revised:  Adbulmutallab told the FBI he met with a radical Yemeni cleric he talked with online.
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Original:   Adbulmutallab said to the FBI that he met with a radical Yemeni cleric he talked with online.
Revised:  Adbulmutallab said to the FBI that he met with a radical Yemeni cleric he corresponded with online.
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Original:  The cleric is not believed to be Anwar al-Awlaki, the cleric who sermons were attended by three of the hijackers in the September 11th terrorist attacks and Major Nidal Malik Hasan who was repsonible for the Fort Hood shooting last month.
Revised:  The cleric is not believed to be Anwar al-Awlaki, the cleric who sermons were attended by three of the hijackers in the September 11th terrorist attacks and Major Nidal Malik Hasan who carried out the Fort Hood shooting last month.
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Original:  Thompson said Congress will look into the matter as soonas possible . "As soon as we reconvene from the holiday recess, we will start looking into the circumstances around the Northwest flight incident."
Revised:  Thompson said Congress will look into the matter soon . "As soon as we reconvene from the holiday recess, we will start looking into the circumstances around the Northwest flight incident."
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Original:  His father had, apparently, made concerns with his son's extremist connections known the the U.S. Embassy in Nigeria.
Revised:  His father had, apparently, made concerns with his son's extremist connections known to the U.S. Embassy in Nigeria.
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Original:  Detroit was the location of an apparant attack on Friday in which a man attempted to light a bomb as the plane carrying him approached the airport.
Revised:  Detroit was the location of an attack attempt on Friday in which a man attempted to light a bomb as the plane carrying him approached the airport.
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Original:  A Lufthansa spokesman described this as "an unfortunate coincidence.
Revised:  A Lufthansa spokesman described today's incident as, "an unfortunate coincidence.
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Original: The 160 people on board remained so while the luggage was inspected in Reykjavic .
Revised: The 160 people on board remained so while the luggage was inspected in Reykjavik .
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Original:  "It seems the passenger in question somehow missed the plane after having checked in," explained Fridthor Eydal of Keflavik International Airport, which serves Reykjavic .
Revised:  "It seems the passenger in question somehow missed the plane after having checked in," explained Fridthor Eydal of Keflavik International Airport, which serves Reykjavik .
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Original: A file photo of Matti Nykanen Police in Finland have arrested Matti Nykanen, a four-time Olympic gold medalist ski jumper, on suspicion of attempted murder.
Revised: A file photo of Matti Nykanen Police in Finland have arrested Matti Nykanen, a four-time Olympic gold medallist ski jumper, on suspicion of attempted murder.
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Original:  He has spent the weekend in custody following an incident  in which his wife was injured on Christmas day .
Revised:  He spent the weekend in custody following an incident in which his wife was injured on Christmas day .
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Original:  He has spent the weekend in custody following an incident  in which his wife was injured on Christmas day .
Revised:  He has spent the weekend in custody following an incident on Christmas Day in which his wife was injured on Christmas day .
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Original:  He has spent the weekend in custody following an incident  in which his wife was injured on Christmas day .
Revised:  He has spent the weekend in custody following an incident in which his wife was injured .
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Original:  The Agence France-Presse reported that the Helsingen Sanomat expects Nykanen, who is from Jyvaskyla, to be charged tommorrow . Nykanen, who won three of his gold medals at the 1988 Winter Olympics in Calgary and has nineteen medals from various competitions, is best known for sport although recently he has taken up singing, performing in bars and nightclubs, and written an autobiography.
Revised:  The Agence France-Presse reported that the Helsingen Sanomat expects Nykanen, from Jyvaskyla, to be charged tommorrow . Nykanen, who won three of his gold medals at the 1988 Winter Olympics in Calgary and has nineteen medals from various competitions, is best known for sport although recently he has taken up singing, performing in bars and nightclubs, and written an autobiography.
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Original:  The Agence France-Presse reported that the Helsingen Sanomat expects Nykanen, who is from Jyvaskyla, to be charged tommorrow . Nykanen, who won three of his gold medals at the 1988 Winter Olympics in Calgary and has nineteen medals from various competitions, is best known for sport although recently he has taken up singing, performing in bars and nightclubs, and written an autobiography.
Revised:  The Agence France-Presse reported that the Helsingen Sanomat expects Nykanen, who is from Jyvaskyla, to be charged tomorrow . Nykanen, who won three of his gold medals at the 1988 Winter Olympics in Calgary and has nineteen medals from various competitions, is best known for sport although recently he has taken up singing, performing in bars and nightclubs, and written an autobiography.
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Original:  A regular sight in the tabloid press, he has sought treatment as an alcoholic and is known to the police, having previously served time in prison for violent offenses .
Revised:  A regular sight in the tabloid press, he has sought treatment as an alcoholic and is known to the police, previously serving time in prison for violent offenses .
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Original:  A regular sight in the tabloid press, he has sought treatment as an alcoholic and is known to the police, having previously served time in prison for violent offenses .
Revised:  A regular sight in the tabloid press, he has sought treatment as an alcoholic and is known to the police, having previously served time in prison for violent offences .
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Original:  His convictions include assaulting his fourth wife in 2006, for which he served four months despite requesting community service , and a stab attack from behind with a five-inch blade on a friend which landed him a two-year suspended sentence and put the man in hospital.
Revised:  His convictions include assaulting his fourth wife in 2006, and he served four months despite requesting community service , and a stab attack from behind with a five-inch blade on a friend which landed him a two-year suspended sentence and put the man in hospital.
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Original:  His convictions include assaulting his fourth wife in 2006, for which he served four months despite requesting community service , and a stab attack from behind with a five-inch blade on a friend which landed him a two-year suspended sentence and put the man in hospital.
Revised:  His convictions include assaulting his fourth wife in 2006, for which he served four months despite requesting community service ; a stab attack from behind with a five-inch blade on a friend which landed him a two-year suspended sentence and put the man in hospital.
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Original:  He also served thriteen months for stabbing a friend while drinking and has been prosecuted for attacking a man with a knife in a restaurant, although this was dropped through lack of evidence.
Revised:  He also served thriteen months for stabbing a friend while drinking and has been prosecuted for attacking a man with a knife in a restaurant, a case dropped through lack of evidence.
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Original:  He has also been given a two-month suspended sentence for forcing entry to a kiosk.
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Original:  A weekly Finnish gossip magazine paid for a series of laughing gas treatments in exchange for story rights in a bid to cobat his alcoholism.
Revised:  A weekly Finnish gossip magazine paid for a series of laughing gas treatments in exchange for story rights in a bid to combat his alcoholism.
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Original:  media reported he did private shows but he deniesever stripping .
Revised:  media reported he did private shows an allegation he denies .
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Original:  Swedish and US porn producers offered him roles in their films
Revised:  Swedish and US porn producer offered him roles in their films
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Original: JPG|File photo of Matti Nykanen  ]] Police in Finland have arrested Matti Nykanen, a four-time Olympic gold medallist ski jumper, on suspicion of attempted murder.
Revised: JPG|File photo of Matti Nykanen . ]] Police in Finland have arrested Matti Nykanen, a four-time Olympic gold medallist ski jumper, on suspicion of attempted murder.
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Original:  Nykanen , 46, is alleged to have left his wife with wounds to her hands and forehead in a knife attack, causing her to flee to a neighbour's house where she called the police.
Revised:  Nykänen , 46, is alleged to have left his wife with wounds to her hands and forehead in a knife attack, causing her to flee to a neighbour's house where she called the police.
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Original:  The Agence France-Presse reported that the Helsingen Sanomat expects Nykanen , from Jyvaskyla, to be charged tomorrow.
Revised:  The Agence France-Presse reported that the Helsingen Sanomat expects Nykänen , from Jyvaskyla, to be charged tomorrow.
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Original:  Nykanen , who won three of his gold medals at the 1988 Winter Olympics in Calgary and has nineteen medals from various competitions, is best known for sport although recently he has taken up singing, performing in bars and nightclubs, and written an autobiography.
Revised:  Nykänen , who won three of his gold medals at the 1988 Winter Olympics in Calgary and has nineteen medals from various competitions, is best known for sport although recently he has taken up singing, performing in bars and nightclubs, and written an autobiography.
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Original: The two top candidates in the 2009 Croatian presidential election 's Ivo Josipović of the Social Democratic Party of Croatia and the independent Milan Bandić  will go into a run-off.
Revised: The two top candidates in the 2009 Croatian presidential election , Ivo Josipović of the Social Democratic Party of Croatia and the independent Milan Bandić will go into a run-off.
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Original: The two top candidates in the 2009 Croatian presidential election 's Ivo Josipović of the Social Democratic Party of Croatia and the independent Milan Bandić  will go into a run-off.
Revised: The two top candidates in the 2009 Croatian presidential election 's Ivo Josipović of the Social Democratic Party of Croatia and the independent Milan Bandić , will go into a run-off.
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Original:  The two candidates have a combined percentage of the vote is 47.2\%, with Josipović having 32.4\% and Bandić having 14.8\%.
Revised:  The two candidates have a combined percentage of the vote of 47.2\%, with Josipović having 32.4\% and Bandić having 14.8\%.
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Original:  There were twelve candidates attempting to succeed the incumbent  Stjepan Mesić who has served the maximum two-terms .
Revised:  There were twelve candidates attempting to succeed the incumbent w: Stjepan Mesić who has served the maximum two-terms .
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Original:  There were twelve candidates attempting to succeed the incumbent  Stjepan Mesić who has served the maximum two-terms .
Revised:  There were twelve candidates attempting to succeed the incumbent Stjepan Mesić who has served the maximum two terms .
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Original:  Although the nation acceptance into the EU is looking unlikely due to the nations suspected corruption.
Revised:  Although the nation acceptance into the EU is looking unlikely due to the nation's suspected corruption.
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Original:  Ivo Josipović is a professor of law at The University of Zagreb and also an award winning composer who's peace " Samba da Camera " won first prize from the European Broadcasting Union.
Revised:  Ivo Josipović is a professor of law at The University of Zagreb and also an award winning composer who's piece Samba da Camera " won first prize from the European Broadcasting Union.
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Original:  Ivo Josipović is a professor of law at The University of Zagreb and also an award winning composer who's peace " Samba da Camera " won first prize from the European Broadcasting Union.
Revised:  Ivo Josipović is a professor of law at The University of Zagreb and also an award winning composer who's peace " Samba da Camera won first prize from the European Broadcasting Union.
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Original:  Milan Bandić is the incumbent mayor of Croatia's capital Zagreb and was also a member of the Social Democratic Party of Croatia until the 2009 election when he lost the party's nomination
Revised:  Milan Bandić is the incumbent mayor of Croatia's capital Zagreb and was also a member of the Social Democratic Party until the 2009 election when he lost the party's nomination
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Original:  The nation has recently become a member of NATO, and both Josipović and Bandić have pledged to support Croatia in its 2012 bid to become members of the European Union , Although acceptance into the EU is looking unlikely due to the nation's suspected corruption .
Revised:  The nation has recently become a member of NATO, and both Josipović and Bandić have pledged to support Croatia in its 2012 bid to become members of the European Union .
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Original:  Maclean's reported that fans of Avatar were anxious to more instructive material from professor Frommer about the language in order to learn how to speak it with others that appreciated the film.
Revised:  Maclean's reported that fans of Avatar were anxious for more instructive material from professor Frommer about the language in order to learn how to speak it with others that appreciated the film.
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Original:  The   linguistics professor relied on inspiration provided by Cameron, and avoided drawing upon influences from Elvish, Klingon, and the international auxiliary language Esperanto.
Revised:  The The linguistics professor relied on inspiration provided by Cameron, and avoided drawing upon influences from Elvish, Klingon, and the international auxiliary language Esperanto.
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Original:   Cameron touted the rich nature of the Na'vi language in publicity for his film.
Revised:  Zoe Saldaña, the actress behind warrior princess Neytiri in Avatar, picked up the Na'vi language faster than her fellow cast members. "Zoe owned the language and everyone had to match her, even her accent," said Cameron. Saldaña remarked that the most difficult part about acting in the film was speaking in English with the accent of the Na'vi people. Cameron touted the rich nature of the Na'vi language in publicity for his film.
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Original:  Frommer   explained the direction given to him before creating the language, "Cameron wanted something melodious and musical, something that would sound strange and alien but smooth and appealing."
Revised:  Frommer Frommer explained the direction given to him before creating the language, "Cameron wanted something melodious and musical, something that would sound strange and alien but smooth and appealing."
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Original:  Cameron asked American professor to develop a language spoken by the extraterrestrial people in the film known as the . Related new 
Revised:  Cameron asked American professor to develop a language spoken by the extraterrestrial people in the film known as the . Related news 
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Original: The Thai government rejects accusations by the international community that thousands of Lao Hmong refugees were being forcibly sent back to Laos.
Revised: The Thai government rejected accusations by the international community that thousands of Lao Hmong refugees were being forcibly sent back to Laos.
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Original:  He says under Thai law the Hmong are illegal immigrants and they have been treated according to law.
Revised:  He said under Thai law the Hmong are illegal immigrants and they have been treated according to law.
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Original:  But the United Nations High Commissioner for Refugees says several in the camp would have qualified as refugees.
Revised:  But the United Nations High Commissioner for Refugees said several in the camp would have qualified as refugees.
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Original:  The Human Rights Watch representative in Thailand, Sunai Pasuk, calls the repatriation a "serious breach in international standards."
Revised:  The Human Rights Watch representative in Thailand, Sunai Pasuk, called the repatriation a "serious breach in international standards."
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Original:  Much of western Europe has been experiencing particularly hot weather this week with much of Ireland enjoying temperatures between 24  and 26 degrees since Saturday afternoon
Revised:  Much of western Europe has been experiencing particularly hot weather this week with much of Ireland enjoying temperatures between 24 °C and 26 degrees since Saturday afternoon
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Original: East Iceland and Egilstaðir This summer has brought a large amount of sunlight to Iceland.
Revised:  This summer has brought a large amount of sunlight to Iceland.
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Original:  Umar Farouk Abdulmutallab a Nigerian national attempted to bomb a airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants  
Revised:  Umar Farouk Abdulmutallab a Nigerian national attempted to bomb a airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants . 
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Original: A 67-year-old man, Thomas Ouellette, of Bonita Springs, Florida was questioned by the FBI Monday after he brought fireworks onto a airliner.
Revised: A 67-year-old man, Thomas Ouellette, of Bonita Springs, Florida was questioned by the FBI Monday after he brought fireworks onto an airliner.
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Original:  Pyrotechnics are banned on American flights and individuals face a $10,000 civil penalty  .
Revised:  Pyrotechnics are banned on American flights and individuals face a $10,000 civil penalty for bringing them on board .
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Original:  This case comes after an terrorist attempted to bomb an airliner on December 25 , 2009.
Revised:  This case comes after an incident on December 25 , 2009.
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Original:  This case comes after an terrorist attempted to bomb an airliner on December 25 , 2009.
Revised:  This case comes after an terrorist attempted to bomb an airliner on December 25 when
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Original:  Umar Farouk Abdulmutallab  a Nigerian national  attempted to bomb a airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants.
Revised:  Umar Farouk Abdulmutallab , a Nigerian national attempted to bomb a airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants.
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Original:  Umar Farouk Abdulmutallab  a Nigerian national  attempted to bomb a airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants.
Revised:  Umar Farouk Abdulmutallab a Nigerian national , attempted to bomb a airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants.
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Original:  Umar Farouk Abdulmutallab  a Nigerian national  attempted to bomb a airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants.
Revised:  Umar Farouk Abdulmutallab a Nigerian national attempted to bomb an airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants.
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Original: A 67-year-old man, Thomas Ouellette, of Bonita Springs , Florida was questioned by the FBI Monday after he brought fireworks onto an airliner.
Revised: A 67-year-old man, Thomas Ouellette, of , Florida was questioned by the FBI Monday after he brought fireworks onto an airliner.
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Original:  Piedmont Airlines flight 4126, a Bombardier Dash 8 , from Baltimore, Maryland landed safely and without complications in New York's LaGuardia Airport.
Revised:  flight 4126, a Bombardier Dash 8 , from Baltimore, Maryland landed safely and without complications in New York's LaGuardia Airport.
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Original:  Piedmont Airlines flight 4126, a Bombardier Dash 8 , from Baltimore, Maryland landed safely and without complications in New York's LaGuardia Airport.
Revised:  Piedmont Airlines flight 4126, a , from Baltimore, Maryland landed safely and without complications in New York's LaGuardia Airport.
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Original:  The fireworks are currently being held as evidence by the Port Authority of New York and New Jersey police , owner of LaGuardia Airport.
Revised:  The fireworks are currently being held as evidence by the , owner of LaGuardia Airport.
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Original:  This case comes after an incident on December 25 when Umar Farouk Abdulmutallab , a Nigerian national, attempted to bomb an airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants.
Revised:  This case comes after an incident on December 25 when , a Nigerian national, attempted to bomb an airliner with explosives concealed in his underpants.
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Original:  Shaikh is said to suffer from bipolar disorder and pleas for clemency have been made by British Prime Minister Gordon Brown and actor Stephen Fry.
Revised:  Shaikh is said to suffer from bipolar disorder and pleas for clemency were made by British Prime Minister Gordon Brown and actor Stephen Fry.
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Original:  Shaikh is said to suffer from bipolar disorder and pleas for clemency were made by British Prime Minister Gordon Brown and actor Stephen Fry.
Revised:  Shaikh is said to have suffered from bipolar disorder and pleas for clemency were made by British Prime Minister Gordon Brown and actor Stephen Fry.
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Original:  [[File:Ürümqi location.png|Location of Ürümqi in China ]] Shaikh's condition reportedly causes him to suffer from delusions, and he has unrealistic ambitions to become a pop star.
Revised:  [[File:Ürümqi location.png|Location of Ürümqi in China ]] Shaikh's condition reportedly caused him to suffer from delusions, and he has unrealistic ambitions to become a pop star.
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Original:  [[File:Ürümqi location.png|Location of Ürümqi in China ]] Shaikh's condition reportedly causes him to suffer from delusions, and he has unrealistic ambitions to become a pop star.
Revised:  [[File:Ürümqi location.png|Location of Ürümqi in China ]] Shaikh's condition reportedly causes him to suffer from delusions, and he had unrealistic ambitions to become a pop star.
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Original:  The single-engine aircraft crashed as its thief tried to take off   
Revised:  The single-engine aircraft crashed as its thief tried to take off . 
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