wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  He and two Navy buddies, all wrestlers, were exploring Shanghai and were amazed by an 80-year old rickshaw man’s ability to pull a wide rickshaw with the three muscular seamen up and down the steep hills of Shanghai.
Revised:  He and two Navy buddies, all wrestlers, were exploring Shanghai and were amazed by an 80-year-old rickshaw man’s ability to pull a wide rickshaw with the three muscular seamen up and down the steep hills of Shanghai.
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Original: Chinese Wand (Jiangan) Exercise or Chinese Health URL is an obscure ancient exercise system, related to the martial art Kung Fu.
Revised: Chinese Wand (Jiangan) Exercise or Chinese Health Wand is an obscure ancient exercise system, related to the martial art Kung Fu.
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Original:  There are adaptations of those tools: the Long Bang (Tai Chidu), a two person version of the URL and the Bent Bang.
Revised:  There are adaptations of those tools: the Long Bang (Tai Chidu), a two person version of the Bang and the Bent Bang.
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Original: Category: Ecology According to biocore, world can be divided into 4 divisions:  Forest Biocore  Savanna Biocore  Grassland Biocore  Desert Biocore They are described below.
Revised: Category: According to biocore, world can be divided into 4 divisions:  Forest Biocore  Savanna Biocore  Grassland Biocore  Desert Biocore They are described below.
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Original:  A milieu of hormones simultaneously affects development of the fetus during embryogenesis and the mother, perhaps most notably human chorionic gonadotropin (hCG) and progesterone (P4).
Revised:  A milieu of hormones simultaneously affects development of the fetus during embryogenesis and the mother, including human chorionic gonadotropin (hCG) and progesterone (P4).
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Original:  20 January 1927 – 24 December 2006) was a Karen rebel leader born in Papun District, which is in present-day Karen State, Myanmar.
Revised:  20 January 1927 – 24 December 2006) was a Karen leader born in Papun District, which is in present-day Karen State, Myanmar.
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Original:  1907 - 2003) was a Chinese Communist politician.
Revised:  1907 – 2003) was a Chinese Communist politician.
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Original: Fannie Ernestine Motley ( born c. 1938 ) Died May 8, 2016  was raised in Monroeville, Alabama.
Revised: Fannie Ernestine Motley ( 1938 ) Died May 8, 2016 was raised in Monroeville, Alabama.
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Original: Fannie Ernestine Motley ( born c. 1938 ) Died May 8, 2016  was raised in Monroeville, Alabama.
Revised: Fannie Ernestine Motley ( born c. 1938 - May 8, 2016 was raised in Monroeville, Alabama.
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Original: Fannie Ernestine Motley ( born c. 1938 ) Died May 8, 2016  was raised in Monroeville, Alabama.
Revised: Fannie Ernestine Motley ( born c. 1938 ) Died May 8, 2016 ) was raised in Monroeville, Alabama.
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Original:  Category:American schoolteachers Category:People associated with the history of African-American civil rights Category: Living people Category: People from Cincinnati, Ohio Category:People from Jeffersonville, Indiana Category:1930s births  Category:Spring Hill College alumni Category:People from Monroeville, Alabama Category:African-American peop
Revised:  Category:American schoolteachers Category:People associated with the history of African-American civil rights Category: People from Cincinnati, Ohio Category:People from Jeffersonville, Indiana Category:1930s births Category:Spring Hill College alumni Category:People from Monroeville, Alabama Category:African-American peop
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Original:  When her husband died in 2001 she moved to Jeffersonville, Indiana to be near her son Rev D. L. Motley Jr (pastor of Gilte Edge Baptist Church).
Revised:  When her husband died in 2001 she moved to Jeffersonville, Indiana to be near her son Rev D. L. Motley Jr (pastor of Gilt Edge Baptist Church).
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Original:  Years before George Wallace attempted to block integration of the University of Alabama, Motley was ready to become the first black student to graduate from Spring Hill College, the white Jesuit university in Mobile, Alabama, in 1956.
Revised:  Years before George Wallace attempted to block integration of the University of Alabama, Motley was became the first black student to graduate from Spring Hill College, the white Jesuit university in Mobile, Alabama, in 1956.
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Original:  Years before George Wallace attempted to block integration of the University of Alabama, Motley was ready to become the first black student to graduate from Spring Hill College, the white Jesuit university in Mobile, Alabama, in 1956.
Revised:  Years before George Wallace attempted to block integration of the University of Alabama, Motley was ready to become the first black student to graduate from Spring Hill College, the white Jesuit school in Mobile, Alabama, in 1956.
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Original:  This historical moment was documented in The New York Times, Jet Magazine and Time Magazine.
Revised:  The moment was documented in The New York Times, Jet Magazine and Time Magazine.
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Original:  Haiti's population is mostly of African descent (5\% are of mixed African and other ancestry)
Revised:  Haiti's population is of African descent (5\% are of mixed African and other ancestry)
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Original:  Haiti's population is  of African descent European descent, Tiano descent and more , though people of many different ethnic and national backgrounds have settled and impacted the country, such as Poles (from Napoleon's Polish legions), Jews, Arabs (from the Arab diaspora), Chinese, Indians, Spanish, Germans (18th century and World War I), Italians, and French, most marrying into the majority black populace and in turn yielding mixed race children (many of whom are prominent in Haitian society).
Revised:  Haiti's population is mostly of African descent European descent, Tiano descent and more , though people of many different ethnic and national backgrounds have settled and impacted the country, such as Poles (from Napoleon's Polish legions), Jews, Arabs (from the Arab diaspora), Chinese, Indians, Spanish, Germans (18th century and World War I), Italians, and French, most marrying into the majority black populace and in turn yielding mixed race children (many of whom are prominent in Haitian society).
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Original:  By the late 1940s he was one of the most powerful members of the Kuomintang, and in 1948, he was a successful candidate for the vice-presidency of the KMT Nationalist Government .
Revised:  By the late 1940s he was one of the most powerful members of the Kuomintang, and in 1948, he was a successful candidate for the vice-presidency of the KMT Nationalist government .
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Original:  Here he began to understand the current political situation and decided to give up imperial exams and a civil career in favor of the military .
Revised:  Here he began to understand the current political situation and decided to give up a civil career in favor of the military .
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Original:  In 1903, when he was 21, he was admitted first to the Hunan Military Academy, and was sent the following year to study in Japan at the Tokyo Shimbu Gakko, a military preparatory academy.
Revised:  In 1903, when he was 21, he was admitted first to the Hunan Military Academy, being then sent to study in Japan at the Tokyo Shimbu Gakko, a military preparatory academy.
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Original:  120px|Magnifying glass Cheng Qian used during the Northern ExpeditionIn 1905 Cheng joined Sun Yat-sen 's Tongmenghui a secret revolutionary society, committed to overthrow the Qing Dynasty and modernize China.
Revised:  120px|Magnifying glass Cheng Qian used during the Northern ExpeditionIn 1905 Cheng met Sun Yat-sen 's Tongmenghui a secret revolutionary society, committed to overthrow the Qing Dynasty and modernize China.
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Original:  120px|Magnifying glass Cheng Qian used during the Northern ExpeditionIn 1905 Cheng joined Sun Yat-sen 's Tongmenghui a secret revolutionary society, committed to overthrow the Qing Dynasty and modernize China.
Revised:  120px|Magnifying glass Cheng Qian used during the Northern ExpeditionIn 1905 Cheng joined Sun Yat-sen and joined the Tongmenghui, a secret revolutionary society, committed to overthrow the Qing Dynasty and modernize China.
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Original:  After graduation in 1908, Cheng returned in China, where he was put in charge of training a New Army in Sichuan Province under  Zhu Qinglan.
Revised:  Cheng then returned in China, where he was put in charge of training a New Army in Sichuan Province under Zhu Qinglan.
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Original:  After graduation in 1908, Cheng returned in China, where he was put in charge of training a New Army in Sichuan Province under  Zhu Qinglan.
Revised:  After graduation in 1908, Cheng returned in China, where he was assigned by the Qing imperial government to train a New Army in Sichuan Province under Zhu Qinglan.
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Original:  After graduation in 1908, Cheng returned in China, where he was put in charge of training a New Army in Sichuan Province under  Zhu Qinglan.
Revised:  After graduation in 1908, Cheng returned in China, where he was put in charge of training a New Army in Sichuan Province under the overall command of Zhu Qinglan.
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Original:  During the Constitutional Protection Movement he was first appointed military commander of Changsha, then Vice Minister of War in Sun Yat-sen's Guangzhou Government.
Revised:  During the Constitutional Protection Movement he was first appointed military commander of Changsha, then Deputy Minister of War in Sun Yat-sen's Guangzhou Government.
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Original:  From 1925 to 1927 he was the General commanding  6th Army, and briefly served as Chairman of the Government of the Hunan Province in 1928.
Revised:  From 1925 to 1927 he was the General commanding the 6th Army, and briefly served as Chairman of the Government of the Hunan Province in 1928.
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Original:   Under Chiang Kai-shek Chen Qian In the following years, Cheng served in several capacities, including chief of General Staff  from 1935 to 1937.
Revised:  In the following years, Cheng served in several capacities, including chief of General Staff from 1935 to 1937.
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Original:   Under Chiang Kai-shek Chen Qian In the following years, Cheng served in several capacities, including chief of General Staff  from 1935 to 1937.
Revised:  Under Chiang Kai-shek Chen Qian In the following years, Cheng served in several capacities, including Chief of General Staff from 1935 to 1937.
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Original:  When the Second Sino-Japanese War began, Cheng Qian was made Commander in Chief of the 1st War Area in July 1937, and concurrently Chairman of the Government of Henan Province from 1937 to 1939.
Revised:  When the Second Sino–Japanese War began, Cheng Qian was made Commander in Chief of the 1st War Area in July 1937, and concurrently Chairman of the Government of Henan Province from 1937 to 1939.
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Original:  When the Second Sino-Japanese War began, Cheng Qian was made Commander in Chief of the 1st War Area in July 1937, and concurrently Chairman of the Government of Henan Province from 1937 to 1939.
Revised:  When the Second Sino-Japanese War began, Cheng Qian was made Commander in Chief of the 1st War Zone in July 1937, and concurrently Chairman of the Government of Henan Province from 1937 to 1939.
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Original:  Cheng Qian was recalled from  1st War area in 1938 to serve as director of the Generalissimo's Headquarters from until 1940.
Revised:  Cheng Qian was recalled from the 1st War area in 1938 to serve as director of the Generalissimo's Headquarters from until 1940.
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Original:  Cheng Qian was recalled from  1st War area in 1938 to serve as director of the Generalissimo's Headquarters from until 1940.
Revised:  Cheng Qian was recalled from 1st War Zone in 1938 to serve as director of the Generalissimo's Headquarters from until 1940.
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Original:  Cheng Qian was recalled from  1st War area in 1938 to serve as director of the Generalissimo's Headquarters from until 1940.
Revised:  Cheng Qian was recalled from 1st War area in 1938 to serve as Director of the Generalissimo's Headquarters from until 1940.
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Original:  Cheng Qian was recalled from  1st War area in 1938 to serve as director of the Generalissimo's Headquarters from until 1940.
Revised:  Cheng Qian was recalled from 1st War area in 1938 to serve as director of the Generalissimo's Headquarters .
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Original:  In 1947 he was elected in the Legislative Yuan (in the first election after 14 years) and contested the vice-presidency of the Republic of China in March 1948, barely losing it to Li Zongren, supported by Chiang Kai-shek.
Revised:  In 1947 he was elected in the Legislative Yuan (in the first election after 14 years) and contested the Vice Presidency of the Republic of China in March 1948, barely losing it to Li Zongren, supported by Chiang Kai-shek.
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Original:  Afterwards, he was appointed governor of Hunan once again.
Revised:  Afterwards, he was appointed Governor of his native Hunan once again.
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Original:   Although the Kuomintang government issued an arrest warrant for Cheng, he was able to reach Beijing to attend the First Session of the Chinese People's Political Consultative Conference .
Revised:  Invited by Mao to Beijing to attend the First Session of the Chinese People's Political Consultative Conference .
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Original:   In the following years, he was elected non-communist governor of Hunan in 1952 , and a vice-chairman of the Standing Committee of the National People's Congress from 1954 till his death.
Revised:  In the following years, he was elected non-communist governor of Hunan in 1952 , and a vice-chairman of the Standing Committee of the National People's Congress ( 1954 till his death.
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Original: In August 1949, in his capacity as Governor of Hunan, he peacefully surrendered the whole province to Mao Zedong's advancing Communist forces, joined the Revolutionary Committee of the Kuomintang and, after the founding of the People's Republic shortly after, went on to serve as Vice Chairman of the Central Military Commission (1949–1968), Governor of Hunan (1952–1967) and Vice Chairman of the National People's Congress (1954–1968), among other posts.
Revised: In August 1949, as Governor of Hunan, he peacefully surrendered the whole province to Mao Zedong's advancing Communist forces, joined the Revolutionary Committee of the Kuomintang and, after the founding of the People's Republic shortly after, went on to serve as Vice Chairman of the Central Military Commission (1949–1968), Governor of Hunan (1952–1967) and Vice Chairman of the National People's Congress (1954–1968), among other posts.
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Original: In August 1949, in his capacity as Governor of Hunan, he peacefully surrendered the whole province to Mao Zedong's advancing Communist forces, joined the Revolutionary Committee of the Kuomintang and, after the founding of the People's Republic shortly after, went on to serve as Vice Chairman of the Central Military Commission (1949–1968), Governor of Hunan (1952–1967) and Vice Chairman of the National People's Congress (1954–1968), among other posts.
Revised: In August 1949, in his capacity as Governor of Hunan, he joined Mao Zedong's advancing Communist forces, joined the Revolutionary Committee of the Kuomintang and, after the founding of the People's Republic shortly after, went on to serve as Vice Chairman of the Central Military Commission (1949–1968), Governor of Hunan (1952–1967) and Vice Chairman of the National People's Congress (1954–1968), among other posts.
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Original:  However, as Yuan Shikai staged his coup to control the Republic, Cheng tried to revolt, but his failure prompted him to flee to Japan, where he joined the Kuomintang and entered the Waseda University, studying for a degree in Political Economy.
Revised:  However, as Yuan Shikai staged his coup to control the Republic, Cheng tried to revolt, but then fled to Japan, where he joined the Kuomintang and entered the Waseda University, studying for a degree in Political Economy.
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Original:  However, as Yuan Shikai staged his coup to control the Republic, Cheng tried to revolt, but his failure prompted him to flee to Japan, where he joined the Kuomintang and entered the Waseda University, studying for a degree in Political Economy.
Revised:  However, as Yuan Shikai staged his coup to control the Republic, Cheng tried to revolt, but his failure prompted him to flee to Japan, where he joined the Kuomintang and entered Waseda University, studying for a degree in Political Economy.
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Original:  During the Cultural Revolution, Cheng Qian was among the non-communists that Mao Zedong and Zhou Enlai prevented from being attacked , but he lost his leadership position in Hunan after a revolutionary committee under Li Yuan's chairmanship was formed there.
Revised:  During the Cultural Revolution, Cheng Qian was among the non-communists that Mao Zedong and Zhou Enlai prevented from being attacked . In Hunan, he was succeeded by Li Yuan after a revolutionary committee under Li Yuan's chairmanship was formed there.
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Original: File:Modern floating surface algae scrubber filter, floating on top of aquarium.jpg| Newest algae scrubber designs use upflowing air bubbles to generate turbulence;
Revised: File:Modern floating surface algae scrubber filter, floating on top of aquarium.jpg| More recent algae scrubber designs use upflowing air bubbles to generate turbulence;
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Original:  Proceedings of the 6th International Coral Reef Symposium, Australia, 1988, Vol. 2 Algae scrubbers allow saltwater and freshwater aquarium and pond hobbyists to operate their tanks the way that oceans and lakes operate: using natural filtration in the form of primary production  .
Revised:  Proceedings of the 6th International Coral Reef Symposium, Australia, 1988, Vol. 2 Algae scrubbers allow saltwater , freshwater and pond hobbyists to operate their tanks the way that oceans and lakes operate: using natural filtration in the form of primary production .
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Original:  Proceedings of the 6th International Coral Reef Symposium, Australia, 1988, Vol. 2 Algae scrubbers allow saltwater and freshwater aquarium and pond hobbyists to operate their tanks the way that oceans and lakes operate: using natural filtration in the form of primary production  .
Revised:  Proceedings of the 6th International Coral Reef Symposium, Australia, 1988, Vol. 2 Algae scrubbers allow saltwater and freshwater aquarium and pond hobbyists to operate their tanks using natural filtration in the form of primary production .
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Original:  Proceedings of the 6th International Coral Reef Symposium, Australia, 1988, Vol. 2 Algae scrubbers allow saltwater and freshwater aquarium and pond hobbyists to operate their tanks the way that oceans and lakes operate: using natural filtration in the form of primary production  .
Revised:  Proceedings of the 6th International Coral Reef Symposium, Australia, 1988, Vol. 2 Algae scrubbers allow saltwater and freshwater aquarium and pond hobbyists to operate their tanks the way that oceans and lakes operate: using natural filtration in the form of primary production , much like oceans and lakes .
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Original: File:Modern floating surface algae scrubber filter, floating on top of aquarium.jpg| More recent algae scrubber designs use upflowing air bubbles to generate turbulence;
Revised: File:Modern floating surface algae scrubber filter, floating on top of aquarium.jpg| Modern algae scrubber designs use upflowing air bubbles to generate turbulence;
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Original:  Biologists then began pointing out that when the amount of nuisance algae became large enough, the algae actually consumed all the available nutrients from the water faster than new nutrients were added . Dr. Adey 's principles were at work again .
Revised:  Biologists then began pointing out that when the amount of nuisance algae became large enough, the algae actually consumed all the available nutrients from the water faster than new nutrients were added , as Dr. Adey 's principles were at work again .
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Original:  Biologists then began pointing out that when the amount of nuisance algae became large enough, the algae actually consumed all the available nutrients from the water faster than new nutrients were added . Dr. Adey 's principles were at work again .
Revised:  Biologists then began pointing out that when the amount of nuisance algae became large enough, the algae actually consumed all the available nutrients from the water faster than new nutrients were added . Dr. Adey had theorized .
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Original:  Fish Disease: Diagnosis and Treatment, Second Edition, 2010 An algae scrubber allows algae to grow, but the algae grow inside the filter instead of in the aquarium or pond.
Revised:  An algae scrubber allows algae to grow, but the algae grow inside the filter instead of in the aquarium or pond.
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Original:  HCO3 [alkalinity] can be.
Revised:  [alkalinity] can be.
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Original:  Nevertheless, "problem" nutrients (ammonia, ammonium, nitrate, nitrite, phosphate, CO2 , metals) were always kept at very low numbers.
Revised:  Nevertheless, "problem" nutrients (ammonia, ammonium, nitrate, nitrite, phosphate, , metals) were always kept at very low numbers.
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Original:  Jefferson's Abridged Bible In 1965, California senator George Murphy began a tradition of keeping a desk near the back of the chamber stocked with candy.
Revised:  In 1965, California senator George Murphy began a tradition of keeping a desk near the back of the chamber stocked with candy.
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Original: Washington's Farewell Address No Senate tradition has been more steadfastly maintained than the annual reading of President George Washington's Farewell Address.
Revised: Washington's Farewell Address The Senate holds an annual reading of President George Washington's Farewell Address.
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Original:  at the adjournment of a senate session the gavels are taken to the Sergeant at Arms' office for URL
Revised:  at the adjournment of a senate session the gavels are taken to the Sergeant at Arms' office for safekeeping.
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Original:  In response to widespread awareness of elephant poaching and the ivory trade , a white marble gavel has been in use since at least 2020.
Revised:  In response to widespread awareness of elephant poaching and illegal ivory trades , a white marble gavel has been in use since at least 2020.
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Original:  Additionally, senators will tend  vote their approval of the nominee, even when the nominee is of the other party, although they are not bound by the custom to do so.
Revised:  Additionally, senators will tend to vote their approval of the nominee, even when the nominee is of the other party, although they are not bound by the custom to do so.
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Original: A function hall , reception hall, or banquet hall is a room or building for the purpose of hosting a party, banquet, wedding or other reception, or other social event.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% History The first recorded mention of "function rooms" is in 1922.
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Original:  Gallery%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Wedding reception Church hall Village hall References
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Original:  Gallery%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Wedding reception Church hall Village hall References
Revised:  Gallery%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References
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