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Original:  On 31 March 2012 , Blackwell was consecrated in St Saviour’s Church, Goulburn in the state of New South Wales , (NSW) Australia as the Regional Bishop of Wagga Wagga .
Revised:  On 31 March , Blackwell was consecrated in St Saviour’s Church, Goulburn in the state of New South Wales , (NSW) Australia as the Regional Bishop of Wagga Wagga .
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Original:  On 31 March 2012 , Blackwell was consecrated in St Saviour’s Church, Goulburn in the state of New South Wales , (NSW) Australia as the Regional Bishop of Wagga Wagga .
Revised:  On 31 March 2012 , Blackwell was consecrated in St Saviour’s Church, Goulburn in the state of , (NSW) Australia as the Regional Bishop of Wagga Wagga .
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Original:  On 31 March, Blackwell was consecrated in St Saviour’s Church, Goulburn in the state of , (NSW) Australia as the Regional Bishop of .
Revised:  On 31 March, Blackwell was consecrated in in the state of , (NSW) Australia as the Regional Bishop of .
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Original: Although Blackwell is quoted as saying "It is a great thing that the gifts of women are being recognised and confirmed” , the  appointment is controversial because the Anglican Archbishop of Sydney and Metropolitan of the Province of NSW, Peter Jensen, whose role it is to lead the service, opposes the ordination of female bishops.
Revised:  Blackwell is quoted as saying "It is a great thing that the gifts of women are being recognised and confirmed” , the appointment is controversial because the Anglican Archbishop of Sydney and Metropolitan of the Province of NSW, Peter Jensen, whose role it is to lead the service, opposes the ordination of female bishops.
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Original: Although Blackwell is quoted as saying "It is a great thing that the gifts of women are being recognised and confirmed” , the  appointment is controversial because the Anglican Archbishop of Sydney and Metropolitan of the Province of NSW, Peter Jensen, whose role it is to lead the service, opposes the ordination of female bishops.
Revised: Although Blackwell is quoted as saying "It is a great thing that the gifts of women are being recognised and confirmed” . appointment is controversial because the Anglican Archbishop of Sydney and Metropolitan of the Province of NSW, Peter Jensen, whose role it is to lead the service, opposes the ordination of female bishops.
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Original: Although Blackwell is quoted as saying "It is a great thing that the gifts of women are being recognised and confirmed” , the  appointment is controversial because the Anglican Archbishop of Sydney and Metropolitan of the Province of NSW, Peter Jensen, whose role it is to lead the service, opposes the ordination of female bishops.
Revised: Although Blackwell is quoted as saying "It is a great thing that the gifts of women are being recognised and confirmed” , the The appointment is controversial because the Anglican Archbishop of Sydney and Metropolitan of the Province of NSW, Peter Jensen, whose role it is to lead the service, opposes the ordination of female bishops.
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Original:  Consequently, he asked the Bishop of Newcastle to represent him at the service.
Revised:  Jensen asked the Bishop of Newcastle to represent him at the service.
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Original:  She was first ordained 19 years ago.
Revised:  She was first ordained nineteen years ago.
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Original:  But More4 News has been searching Arabic websites to see what kind of jihadist information is still available onlin
Revised:  But More4News has been searching Arabic websites to see what kind of jihadist information is still available onlin
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Original:  But More4 News has been searching Arabic websites to see what kind of jihadist information is still available onlin
Revised:  But More4 News has been searching Arabic websites to see what kind of jihadi information is still available onlin
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Original: 200px On Friday Reuters reported , quoting diplomats for the UN in Vienna who wish to remain anonymous , that preliminary analysis of microscopic dust collected from equipment at the now razed Lavizan-Shiyan research center in Iran in January of 2005, contained traces of "highly enriched uranium" in the samples . "It's no smoking gun.
Revised: 200px On Friday , Reuters published a report quoting UN diplomats from Vienna who wish to remain anonymous , that preliminary analysis of microscopic dust collected from equipment at the now razed Lavizan-Shiyan research center in Iran in January of 2005, contained traces of "highly enriched uranium" in the samples . "It's no smoking gun.
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Original: 200px On Friday Reuters reported , quoting diplomats for the UN in Vienna who wish to remain anonymous , that preliminary analysis of microscopic dust collected from equipment at the now razed Lavizan-Shiyan research center in Iran in January of 2005, contained traces of "highly enriched uranium" in the samples . "It's no smoking gun.
Revised: 200px On Friday Reuters reported , quoting diplomats for the UN in Vienna who wish to remain anonymous alleging that preliminary analysis of microscopic dust collected from equipment at the now razed Lavizan-Shiyan research center in Iran in January of 2005, contained traces of "highly enriched uranium" in the samples . "It's no smoking gun.
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Original: 200px On Friday Reuters reported , quoting diplomats for the UN in Vienna who wish to remain anonymous , that preliminary analysis of microscopic dust collected from equipment at the now razed Lavizan-Shiyan research center in Iran in January of 2005, contained traces of "highly enriched uranium" in the samples . "It's no smoking gun.
Revised: 200px On Friday Reuters reported , quoting diplomats for the UN in Vienna who wish to remain anonymous , that preliminary analysis of microscopic dust collected from equipment at the now razed Lavizan-Shiyan research center in Iran in January of 2005, contained traces of "highly enriched uranium" . "It's no smoking gun.
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Original:  But it increases pressure on Iran to come clean about Lavizan," Reuters reported the European diplomat for the UN as saying .
Revised:  But it increases pressure on Iran to come clean about Lavizan," Reuters reported the European diplomat as stating .
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Original:   " These comments lack any importance and do not come from a real source , " said Iran's Foreign Ministry spokesman, Hamid Reza Asefi .
Revised:  " these comments lack any importance and do not come from a real source , " said Iran's Foreign Ministry spokesman, Hamid Reza Asefi .
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Original:   " These comments lack any importance and do not come from a real source , " said Iran's Foreign Ministry spokesman, Hamid Reza Asefi .
Revised:  " These comments lack any importance and do not come from a real source " said Iran's Foreign Ministry spokesman, Hamid Reza Asefi .
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Original:  According to the Islamic Republic News Agency,  head of the IAEA, Mohamed ElBaradei said today that the finding of the highly enriched uranium is "of little significance at the current juncture."
Revised:  According to the Islamic Republic News Agency, the head of the IAEA, Mohamed ElBaradei said today that the finding of the highly enriched uranium is "of little significance at the current juncture."
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Original:  ElBaradei also said that the investigation into where it came from is continuing and that the uranium could have come from equipment that was imported to Iran, but that "time is still needed to reach a conclusion in this respect."
Revised:  ElBaradei also pointed out that the investigation into where it came from is continuing and that the uranium could have come from equipment that was imported to Iran, but that "time is still needed to reach a conclusion in this respect."
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Original:  ElBardaei also said that he is aware of the right for Iran to use nuclear material for "peaceful purposes" and that "a balance between Iran's nuclear rights and concerns of the international community would not be created through verbal disputes, but rather dialogue would be the solution."
Revised:  ElBardaei also highlighed that he is aware of the right for Iran to use nuclear material for "peaceful purposes" and that "a balance between Iran's nuclear rights and concerns of the international community would not be created through verbal disputes, but rather dialogue would be the solution."
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Original:  Iran has denied that any nuclear work has been done at this facility and called the claims made by the UN "baseless and without importance," added Asefi.
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Original:  But it increases pressure on Iran to come clean about Lavizan," Reuters reported the European diplomat as stating . Back in 2003, inspectors had discovered several sites in Iran that tested positive for highly enriched uranium, but the uranium was believed to have come from equipment that was previously from Pakistan .
Revised:  But it increases pressure on Iran to come clean about Lavizan," Reuters reported the European diplomat as stating Back in 2003, inspectors had discovered several sites in Iran that tested positive for highly enriched uranium, but the uranium was believed to have come from equipment that was previously from Pakistan .
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Original:  But it increases pressure on Iran to come clean about Lavizan," Reuters reported the European diplomat as stating . Back in 2003, inspectors had discovered several sites in Iran that tested positive for highly enriched uranium, but the uranium was believed to have come from equipment that was previously from Pakistan .
Revised:  But it increases pressure on Iran to come clean about Lavizan," Reuters reported the European diplomat as stating . .
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Original:   A US military base currently occupies the Diego Garcia,  after having been leased the land by the British government.
Revised:  A US military base currently occupies Diego Garcia, after having been leased the land by the British government.
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Original:  The base was used during the Iraq war   
Revised:  The base played a role in the Iraq war 
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Original: There are around 4,000 exiles from the Chagos islands, with most living in povery within the poor areas of Mauritus .
Revised: There are around 4,000 exiles from the Chagos islands, with most living in poverty within the poor areas of Mauritus .
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Original: There are around 4,000 exiles from the Chagos islands, with most living in povery within the poor areas of Mauritus .
Revised: There are around 4,000 exiles from the Chagos islands, with most living in povery within the poor areas of Mauritius .
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Original:  A US military base currently occupies Diego Garcia, the biggest island in thr group, after having been leased the land by the British government.
Revised:  A US military base currently occupies Diego Garcia, the biggest island in the group, after having been leased the land by the British government.
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Original:  Lawyers for the Illois argued that although they would not initially be able to live in Diego Garcia, they should be allowed to return to another of the 52 islands within the group (which contains over 600 islands in total).
Revised:  Lawyers for the Ilois argued that although they would not initially be able to live in Diego Garcia, they should be allowed to return to another of the 52 islands within the group (which contains over 600 islands in total).
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Original:  Category:California Category:United States Category:North America Category:Educati
Revised:  1999
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Original:  Just before 2 p.m. PDT, Freedman announced his decision in his Oakland courtroom.
Revised:  Just before 2 p.m. PDT, Freedman announced his decision in his courtroom.
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Original:  At James Logan High School , about 70 students are effected.
Revised:  At , about 70 students are effected.
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Original: According to a story released on January 26, 2005 by the Chinese news agency Xinhau the government of China has banned 50 illegal electronic games in a new government probe into the software market and electronic publication.
Revised: According to a story released on January 26, 2005 by the Chinese news agency Xinhua the government of China has banned 50 illegal electronic games in a new government probe into the software market and electronic publication.
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Original:  The Director of the State Anti-Porn OfficeLiu Binjie said that the Chinese government will concentrate on combating illegal publications: pirated textbooks, electronic publications and illegal journals that may have negative influence on the youth.
Revised:  The Director of the State Anti-Pornography Office, Liu Binjie, said that the Chinese government will concentrate on combating illegal publications: pirated textbooks, electronic publications and illegal journals that may have negative influence on the youth.
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Original: Police officer Helenda Oimei is quoted by the AFP in affidavit as saying, "The confrontation included an officer involved shooting and one of the six individuals on the green fishing boat later succumbed to injuries he obtained during the confrontation." Palau President Johnson Toribiong has spoken to the press about the plane crash, confirming the police plane was believed to have crashed and that a pilot and two police officers are amongst the missing.
Revised: Police officer Helenda Oimei is quoted by the Agence France-Presse in affidavit as saying, "The confrontation included an officer involved shooting and one of the six individuals on the green fishing boat later succumbed to injuries he obtained during the confrontation." Palau President Johnson Toribiong has spoken to the press about the plane crash, confirming the police plane was believed to have crashed and that a pilot and two police officers are amongst the missing.
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Original:  The police officers, who were patrolling territorial waters in search of the burning Chinese fishing mothership, are feared missing as their plane has not been heard from in over forty-eight hours.
Revised:  Three police officers, who were patrolling territorial waters in search of the burning Chinese fishing mothership, are feared missing as their plane has not been heard from in over forty-eight hours.
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Original:  The police officers, who were patrolling territorial waters in search of the burning Chinese fishing mothership, are feared missing as their plane has not been heard from in over forty-eight hours.
Revised:  The police officers, who were patrolling territorial waters in search of the Chinese fishing mothership, are feared missing as their plane has not been heard from in over forty-eight hours.
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Original:  The police officers, who were patrolling territorial waters in search of the burning Chinese fishing mothership, are feared missing as their plane has not been heard from in over forty-eight hours.
Revised:  The police officers, who were patrolling territorial waters in search of the burning Chinese fishing mothership, are feared missing as their plane was not heard from in over forty-eight hours.
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Original:  They may face up to two years in jail and be required to pay a USD 50,000 fine if found guilty  .
Revised:  They may face up to two years in jail and be required to pay a 50,000 fine if found guilty .
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Original:  An extensive search is underway to find the crash site.
Revised:  An extensive search thus far failed to find the crash site.
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Original: Sand sculpture at a Palauan beach for the celebration of the shark sanctuary|thumb Palau's Ministry of Justice|thumb , — Over the course of the weekend, Palau's police shot a Chinese fisherman believed to be illegally fishing in the economic zone of the tiny Micronesian nation.
Revised: Sand sculpture at a Palauan beach for the celebration of the shark sanctuary|thumb , — Over the course of the weekend, Palau's police shot a Chinese fisherman believed to be illegally fishing in the economic zone of the tiny Micronesian nation.
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Original: Sand sculpture at a Palauan beach for the celebration of the shark sanctuary|thumb , — Over the course of the weekend, Palau's police shot a Chinese fisherman believed to be illegally fishing in the economic zone of the tiny Micronesian nation.
Revised: Sand sculpture at a Palauan beach for the celebration of the shark sanctuary|thumb Over the course of the weekend, Palau's police shot a Chinese fisherman believed to be illegally fishing in the economic zone of the tiny Micronesian nation.
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Original:  If the transfer to preditor-free Kapiti works, it will become the first time that bats have ever been trans-located.
Revised:  If the transfer to predator-free Kapiti works, it will become the first time that bats have ever been trans-located.
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Original:  All previous attempts at moving bats had failed due to bats natural homing instincts.
Revised:  All previous attempts at moving bats have failed due to bats natural homing instincts.
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Original:  The young bats, which weigh in at only 14grams each, were born in the week around New Year and were raised at Pukaha Mount Bruce National Wildlife Centre near Eketahuna Conservation Minister Chris Carter said that while  trial was risky, it was also worthwhile.
Revised:  The young bats, which weigh in at only 14grams each, were born in the week around New Year and were raised at Pukaha Mount Bruce National Wildlife Centre near Eketahuna Conservation Minister Chris Carter said that while the trial was risky, it was also worthwhile.
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Original: All previous attempts at moving bats have failed due to bats natural homing instincts.
Revised: All previous attempts at moving bats have failed due to their natural homing instincts.
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Original:  However scientists with the Department of Conservation, are aiming to overcome this by shifiting juveniles.
Revised:  However scientists with the Department of Conservation, are aiming to overcome this by shifting juveniles.
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Original:  The young bats, which weigh in at only 14grams each, were born in the week around New Year and were raised at Pukaha Mount Bruce National Wildlife Centre near Eketahuna 
Revised:  The young bats, which weigh in at only 14 grams each, were born in the week around New Year and were raised at Pukaha Mount Bruce National Wildlife Centre near Eketahuna 
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Original:  The young bats, which weigh in at only 14grams each, were born in the week around New Year and were raised at Pukaha Mount Bruce National Wildlife Centre near Eketahuna 
Revised:  The young bats, which weigh in at only 14grams each, were born in the week around New Year and were raised at Pukaha Mount Bruce National Wildlife Centre near Eketahuna .
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Original: , — A number of games were played in the Major Division of the 2012 Saipan Little League this past Sunday, including a game where 2011 all-star Virgil Secharmidal's Aces beat the McDonald's 13-7 with Secharmidal earning his second home run of the season.
Revised: , — A number of games were played in the Major Division of the 2012 Saipan this past Sunday, including a game where 2011 all-star Virgil Secharmidal's Aces beat the McDonald's 13-7 with Secharmidal earning his second home run of the season.
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Original:  The Pacific Amusement Rays had come into the game with a record of 5-3  
Revised:  The Pacific Amusement Rays had come into the game with a record of 5-3 . 
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Original: , — A number of baseball games were played in the Major Division of the 2012 Saipan this past Sunday, including a game where 2011 all-star Virgil Secharmidal's Aces beat the McDonald's 13-7 with Secharmidal earning his second home run of the season.
Revised:  A number of baseball games were played in the Major Division of the 2012 Saipan this past Sunday, including a game where 2011 all-star Virgil Secharmidal's Aces beat the McDonald's 13-7 with Secharmidal earning his second home run of the season.
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Original: The U.S. Senate has scheduled debate and a vote in June on a bill that would  initiate a process for Native Hawaiians to achieve the same level of self-governance and autonomy over their own affairs that many Native American tribes currently have.
Revised: The U.S. Senate has scheduled debate and a vote in June on a bill that would allegedly initiate a process for Native Hawaiians to achieve the same level of self-governance and autonomy over their own affairs that many Native American tribes currently have.
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Original:  Map  of Central Java province within Indonesia
Revised:  Map showing location of Central Java province within Indonesia
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Original:  Map showing location of Central Java province within Indonesia
Revised:  Location of Central Java province within Indonesia
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Original:  Historians say that Mount Merapi has been erupting for 10,000 years.
Revised:  Historians say that Mount Merapi has been active for 10,000 years.
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Original:  According to the local folklore the volcano's eruption is the result of spirits being angered by not receiving sufficient offerings or by a disrespectful attitude among the people in slopes, which of course, as all scientists know, is nonsense .
Revised:  According to the local folklore the volcano's eruption is the result of spirits being angered by not receiving sufficient offerings or by a disrespectful attitude among the people on the slopes .
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Original: Liverpool football club have won the FA Cup 2006 3-1 on penalties after an eventful final against West Ham United ending 3-3 after extra time.
Revised: Liverpool Football Club have won the FA Cup 2006 3-1 on penalties after an eventful final against West Ham United ending 3-3 after extra time.
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Original: Liverpool football club have won the FA Cup 2006 3-1 on penalties after an eventful final against West Ham United ending 3-3 after extra time.
Revised: Liverpool football club have won the 2006 FA Cup 3-1 on penalties after an eventful final against West Ham United ending 3-3 after extra time.
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Original:  Whilst the first twenty minutes were a bit of a slow start , the pace couldn't have been any faster for the rest of the ninety minutes of normal play.
Revised:  Whilst the first twenty minutes started slowly , the pace couldn't have been any faster for the rest of the ninety minutes of normal play.
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Original:  Whilst the first twenty minutes were a bit of a slow start , the pace couldn't have been any faster for the rest of the ninety minutes of normal play.
Revised:  Whilst the first twenty minutes were a bit of a slow start , the pace couldn't have been any faster during the rest of the ninety minutes of normal play.
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Original:  West Ham took an early lead from an own goal twenty one minutes into the game, before scoring another goal with Ashton seven minutes later.
Revised:  West Ham took an early lead from an own goal twenty one minutes into the game, before scoring another through w:Dean Ashton seven minutes later.
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Original:  Konchesky for West Ham scored 54 minutes in with a left wing cross that  ended up in the back of the net.
Revised:  Konchesky for West Ham scored 54 minutes in with a left wing cross that somehow ended up in the back of the net.
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Original:  With West Ham 3-2 up, play continued at a fast pace with plenty of opportunities both ways , but the Hammers looked set to hold out till the final whistle.
Revised:  With West Ham 3-2 up, play continued at a frantic pace with plenty of opportunities both ways , but the Hammers looked set to hold out till the final whistle.
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