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Original:  Police have also contacted the parents of the murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that , a journalist working for the NotW , may have hacked into her mobile phone after she dissappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe she was still alive.
Revised:  Police have also contacted the parents of the murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that reporters working for the NotW , may have hacked into her mobile phone after she dissappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe she was still alive.
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Original:  Police have also contacted the parents of the murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that , a journalist working for the NotW , may have hacked into her mobile phone after she dissappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe she was still alive.
Revised:  Police have also contacted the parents of the murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that , a journalist working for the NotW may have hacked into her mobile phone after she dissappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe she was still alive.
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Original: British tabloid newspaper the has been axed after a week of devestating allegations about in the paper that has struck at the heart of , the media giant owned by .
Revised: British tabloid newspaper the has been axed after a week of devastating allegations about in the paper that has struck at the heart of , the media giant owned by .
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Original:  The announcement that the paper will close after the last edition is printed on Sunday came after advertisers backed out of the publication as it emerged journalists at the paper may have hacked into the messages of missing schoolgirl , victims of the and families of servicemen killed in Afghanistan.
Revised:  The announcement that the paper will close came after advertisers backed out of the publication as it emerged journalists at the paper may have hacked into the messages of missing schoolgirl , victims of the and families of servicemen killed in Afghanistan.
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Original:  The announcement that the paper will close after the last edition is printed on Sunday came after advertisers backed out of the publication as it emerged journalists at the paper may have hacked into the messages of missing schoolgirl , victims of the and families of servicemen killed in Afghanistan.
Revised:  The announcement that the paper will close after the last edition is printed on Sunday came after advertisers backed out of the publication due to emerging allegations that journalists at the paper may have hacked into the messages of missing schoolgirl , victims of the and families of servicemen killed in Afghanistan.
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Original:   "Having consulted senior colleagues, I have decided that we must take further decisive action with respect to the paper," , the chairman of News International , said in a statement after police announced they believed as many as 4,000 people may have had their phones hacked by NotW journalists.
Revised:  "Having consulted senior colleagues, I have decided that we must take further decisive action with respect to the paper," News International chairman said in a statement after police announced they believed as many as 4,000 people may have had their phones hacked by NotW journalists.
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Original:  The closure of the Sunday tabloid—the bestselling newspaper in the country—topped a week of allegations that lead to devestating criticisms of Murdoch's media empire and forced David Cameron, the prime minister, to order a public inquiry into the hacking.
Revised:  The closure of the Sunday tabloid—the best-selling newspaper in the country—topped a week of allegations that lead to devestating criticisms of Murdoch's media empire and forced David Cameron, the prime minister, to order a public inquiry into the hacking.
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Original:  The closure of the Sunday tabloid—the bestselling newspaper in the country—topped a week of allegations that lead to devestating criticisms of Murdoch's media empire and forced David Cameron, the prime minister, to order a public inquiry into the hacking.
Revised:  The closure of the Sunday tabloid—the bestselling newspaper in the country—topped a week of allegations that lead to devastating criticisms of Murdoch's media empire and forced David Cameron, the prime minister, to order a public inquiry into the hacking.
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Original:  The closure of the Sunday tabloid—the bestselling newspaper in the country—topped a week of allegations that lead to devestating criticisms of Murdoch's media empire and forced David Cameron, the prime minister, to order a public inquiry into the hacking.
Revised:  The closure of the Sunday tabloid—the bestselling newspaper in the country—topped a week of allegations that lead to devestating criticisms of Murdoch's media empire and forced Prime Minister David Cameron to order a public inquiry into the hacking.
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Original:  In a dramatic week for Murdoch  it was reported that journalists hacked into the phones of the families of British soldiers killed during the , and relatives of the victims of the  attacks on London on July 7th, 2005.
Revised:  In a dramatic week for Murdoch , it was reported that journalists hacked into the phones of the families of British soldiers killed during the , and relatives of the victims of the attacks on London on July 7th, 2005.
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Original:  In a dramatic week for Murdoch  it was reported that journalists hacked into the phones of the families of British soldiers killed during the , and relatives of the victims of the  attacks on London on July 7th, 2005.
Revised:  In a dramatic week for Murdoch it was reported that journalists hacked into the phones of the families of British soldiers killed during the , and relatives of the victims of the attacks on London .
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Original:  Police have also contacted the parents of the murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that reporters working for the NotW may have hacked into her mobile phone after she dissappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe  she was still alive.
Revised:  Police have also contacted the parents of murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that reporters working for the NotW may have hacked into her mobile phone after she dissappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe she was still alive.
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Original:  Police have also contacted the parents of the murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that reporters working for the NotW may have hacked into her mobile phone after she dissappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe  she was still alive.
Revised:  Police have also contacted the parents of the murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that reporters working for the NotW may have hacked into her mobile phone after she disappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe she was still alive.
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Original:  Police have also contacted the parents of the murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that reporters working for the NotW may have hacked into her mobile phone after she dissappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe  she was still alive.
Revised:  Police have also contacted the parents of the murdered schoolgirl Milly Dowler to warn them that reporters working for the NotW may have hacked into her mobile phone after she dissappeared in 2002, leading them to falsely believe that she was still alive.
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Original:  Announcing a public inquiry into the hacking allegations, Cameron said on Wednesday reports in newspaper about the hacking of Milly Dowler's phone were "absolutely disgusting ".
Revised:  Announcing a public inquiry into the hacking allegations, Cameron said on Wednesday that reports in about the hacking of Milly Dowler's phone were "absolutely disgusting ".
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Original:  Announcing a public inquiry into the hacking allegations, Cameron said on Wednesday reports in newspaper about the hacking of Milly Dowler's phone were "absolutely disgusting ".
Revised:  Announcing a public inquiry into the hacking allegations, Cameron said on Wednesday reports in newspaper about the hacking of Dowler's phone were "absolutely disgusting ".
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Original:  The last edition of News of the World will be printed Sunday  "Having consulted senior colleagues, I have decided that we must take further decisive action with respect to the paper," News International chairman said in a statement after police announced they believed as many as 4,000 people may have had their phones hacked by NotW journalists.
Revised:  The last edition of News of the World will be printed Sunday . "Having consulted senior colleagues, I have decided that we must take further decisive action with respect to the paper," News International chairman said in a statement after police announced they believed as many as 4,000 people may have had their phones hacked by NotW journalists.
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Original:  The closure of the Sunday tabloid—the best-selling newspaper in the country—topped a week of allegations that lead to devastating criticisms of Murdoch's media empire and forced Prime Minister David Cameron to order a public inquiry into the hacking.
Revised:  The closure of the Sunday tabloid—the best-selling newspaper in the country—topped a week of allegations that lead to devastating criticisms of Murdoch's media empire and forced prime minister David Cameron to order a public inquiry into the hacking.
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Original: The evidence comes from a DNA analysis of fossil bones collected from the teeth and bones of 17 bears from eight Irish caves.
Revised: The evidence comes from a analysis of fossil bones collected from the teeth and bones of 17 bears from eight Irish caves.
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Original: Polar Bear (Ursus maritimus  Modern s are genetically related to an extinct species of Irish brown bear, sharing a distinct not present in other brown bears, according to a study published today in the latest edition of the journal .
Revised: Polar Bear (Ursus maritimus ) Modern s are genetically related to an extinct species of Irish brown bear, sharing a distinct not present in other brown bears, according to a study published today in the latest edition of the journal .
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Original:  This strongly suggests that all modern polar bears are descended from the same species of extinct female Irish brown bear .
Revised:  This strongly suggests that all modern polar bears are descended from the same extinct species .
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Original:  The study found evidence of polar bear hybridization with an extinct population of brown bears that lived in Ireland and Britain during the last ice age. s are no longer found on the British Isles.
Revised:  The study found evidence of polar bear with an extinct population of brown bears that lived in Ireland and Britain during the last ice age. s are no longer found on the British Isles.
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Original:  However, the samples used in the analysis came from the past 120,000 years and show that interbreeding of the two species occurred a great deal earlier.
Revised:  However, the samples used in the analysis came from the past 120,000 years and show that of the two species occurred a great deal earlier.
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Original:  It has been thought until now that polar bears interbred more recently , around 14,000 years ago, with brown bears living in the vicinity of Alaska.
Revised:  It has been thought until now that polar bears interbred more recently with brown bears living in the vicinity of Alaska.
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Original: Polar Bear (Ursus maritimus) Modern s are genetically related to an extinct species of Irish brown bear, sharing a distinct not present in other brown bears, according to a study published today in the latest edition of the journal .
Revised: Polar Bear (Ursus maritimus) Modern are genetically related to an extinct species of Irish brown bear, sharing a distinct not present in other brown bears, according to a study published today in the latest edition of the journal .
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Original: Polar Bear (Ursus maritimus) Modern s are genetically related to an extinct species of Irish brown bear, sharing a distinct not present in other brown bears, according to a study published today in the latest edition of the journal .
Revised: Polar Bear (Ursus maritimus) Modern s are genetically related to an extinct species of Irish brown bear, according to a study published today in . The two share a distinct not present in other brown bears, according to a study published today in the latest edition of the journal .
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Original:  The study found evidence of polar bear with an extinct population of brown bears that lived in Ireland and Britain during the last ice age. s are no longer found on the British Isles .
Revised:  The study found evidence of polar bear with a now-extinct population of brown bears that lived in Ireland and Britain during the last ice age. s are no longer found on the British Isles .
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Original:  The study found evidence of polar bear with an extinct population of brown bears that lived in Ireland and Britain during the last ice age. s are no longer found on the British Isles .
Revised:  The study found evidence of polar bear with an extinct population of brown bears that lived in Ireland and Britain during the last ice age. are no longer found on the British Isles .
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Original:  It has been thought until now that polar bears interbred more recently with brown bears living in the vicinity of Alaska.
Revised:  It has been thought until now that polar bears interbred more recently with brown bears living around Alaska.
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Original:  The evidence comes from a analysis of fossil bones collected from the teeth and bones of 17 bears from eight Irish caves.
Revised:  The evidence comes from a analysis of fossil bones collected from the teeth and bones of seventeen bears from eight Irish caves.
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Original:  Ten Irish brown bears from the period between 10,000 and 38,000 years ago carried a distinct sequence of , that of a specific female brown bear, and this has been uniquely passed down the female polar bear line and is found in all polar bears today.
Revised:  Ten Irish brown bears from between 10,000 and 38,000 years ago carried a distinct sequence of , that of a specific female brown bear, and this has been uniquely passed down the female polar bear line and is found in all polar bears today.
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Original:  Ten Irish brown bears from the period between 10,000 and 38,000 years ago carried a distinct sequence of , that of a specific female brown bear, and this has been uniquely passed down the female polar bear line and is found in all polar bears today.
Revised:  Ten Irish brown bears from the period between 10,000 and 38,000 years ago carried a distinct sequence of , originating from a specific female brown bear, and this has been uniquely passed down the female polar bear line and is found in all polar bears today.
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Original:  Ten Irish brown bears from the period between 10,000 and 38,000 years ago carried a distinct sequence of , that of a specific female brown bear, and this has been uniquely passed down the female polar bear line and is found in all polar bears today.
Revised:  Ten Irish brown bears from the period between 10,000 and 38,000 years ago carried a distinct sequence of , that of a specific female brown bear, and this has been passed down the female polar bear line and is found in all polar bears today.
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Original:  Fossils from  last species of ancient brown bears in Ireland, living from 3,000 to 5,000 years ago, have yet a different unique genetic figure print , matching neither that of polar bears nor of modern brown bears.
Revised:  Fossils from the last species of ancient brown bears in Ireland, living from 3,000 to 5,000 years ago, have yet a different unique genetic figure print , matching neither that of polar bears nor of modern brown bears.
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Original:  Fossils from  last species of ancient brown bears in Ireland, living from 3,000 to 5,000 years ago, have yet a different unique genetic figure print , matching neither that of polar bears nor of modern brown bears.
Revised:  Fossils from last species of ancient brown bears in Ireland, living from 3,000 to 5,000 years ago, have a different genetic fingerprint , matching neither that of polar bears nor of modern brown bears.
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Original:    ] ] Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country.
Revised:  a] ] Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country.
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Original:    ] ] Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country.
Revised:  ] i] Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country.
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Original:  British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the " a%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from  £ 1, 096 to £ 1, 288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £ 258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1, 030 a year to £1,288" . Richard Lloyd from product sampling charity criticised the decision, stating:
Revised:  a%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from £ 1, 096 to £ 1, 288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £ 258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1, 030 a year to £1,288" . Richard Lloyd from product sampling charity criticised the decision, stating:
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Original:  British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the " a%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from  £ 1, 096 to £ 1, 288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £ 258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1, 030 a year to £1,288" . Richard Lloyd from product sampling charity criticised the decision, stating:
Revised:  British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the " %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from £ 1, 096 to £ 1, 288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £ 258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1, 030 a year to £1,288" . Richard Lloyd from product sampling charity criticised the decision, stating:
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Original:  British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the " a%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from  £ 1, 096 to £ 1, 288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £ 258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1, 030 a year to £1,288" . Richard Lloyd from product sampling charity criticised the decision, stating:
Revised:  British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the " a%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from £ 1, 096 to £ 1, i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £ 258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1, 030 a year to £1,288" . Richard Lloyd from product sampling charity criticised the decision, stating:
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Original:  British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the " a%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from  £ 1, 096 to £ 1, 288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £ 258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1, 030 a year to £1,288" . Richard Lloyd from product sampling charity criticised the decision, stating:
Revised:  British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the " a%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from £ 1, 096 to £ 1, 288" and that " %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £ 258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1, 030 a year to £1,288" . Richard Lloyd from product sampling charity criticised the decision, stating:
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Original:  Prior to this instance, the company have pushed prices up eight months previously, with values going seven per cent uphill.
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Original: British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the "[a]verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from £ 1,096 to £1,288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1,030 a year to £1,288" . Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country .
Revised: British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the "[a]verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from 1,096 to £1,288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1,030 a year to £1,288" . Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country .
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Original: British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the "[a]verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from £ 1,096 to £1,288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1,030 a year to £1,288" . Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country .
Revised: British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the "[a]verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from £ 1,096 to £1,288" i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1,030 a year to £1,288" . Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country .
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Original: British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the "[a]verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from £ 1,096 to £1,288" and that " i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1,030 a year to £1,288" . Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country .
Revised: British price comparison website uSwitch has reported that the "[a]verage household bill for a dual fuel British Gas customer will now go up from £ 1,096 to £1,288" and that " %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% n total, British Gas customers will have seen their bills shoot up by £258 or 25\% within a year, taking them from £1,030 a year to £1,288" . Mike O'Connor, the of consumer organisation , has claimed that "[t]his price rise will send a shock wave across the country .
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