wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Although the risk is very low, HIV can also be transmitted to a baby through food that was previously chewed by a gestational parent or caretaker infected with HIV.
Revised:  Although the risk is very low, HIV can also be transmitted to a baby through food that was previously chewed by a mother or caretaker infected with HIV.
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Original:  In these situations, it is important that gestational parents adhere strictly to their ART regimens and it is advised that infants infants are administered antiretroviral drugs for the prevention of possible viral transmission for at least 6 weeks.
Revised:  In these situations, it is important that mothers adhere strictly to their ART regimens and it is advised that infants infants are administered antiretroviral drugs for the prevention of possible viral transmission for at least 6 weeks.
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Original:  Notably, when gestational parents do not comply with their ART regimens, there is a 15-20\% risk of infant HIV acquisition from breastfeeding over 2 years.
Revised:  Notably, when mothers do not comply with their ART regimens, there is a 15-20\% risk of infant HIV acquisition from breastfeeding over 2 years.
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Original:  Both infants and gestational parents should be regularly tested every throughout breastfeeding to ensure appropriate viral suppression and lack of HIV transmission.
Revised:  Both infants and mothers should be regularly tested every throughout breastfeeding to ensure appropriate viral suppression and lack of HIV transmission.
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Original:  The WHO dictates that in developing nations, the decision about whether or not gestational parents breastfeed their infants must weigh the risk of preventing HIV acquisition in the infant against the increased risk of death from malnutrition, diarrhea, and serious non-HIV infection if the infant is not breastfed.
Revised:  The WHO dictates that in developing nations, the decision about whether or not mothers breastfeed their infants must weigh the risk of preventing HIV acquisition in the infant against the increased risk of death from malnutrition, diarrhea, and serious non-HIV infection if the infant is not breastfed.
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Original:  The WHO's 2010 HIV and Infant Feeding Recommendations intend to increase the rate of HIV-survival and reduce non-HIV related risk in infants and gestational parents , and they include the following:
Revised:  The WHO's 2010 HIV and Infant Feeding Recommendations intend to increase the rate of HIV-survival and reduce non-HIV related risk in infants and mothers , and they include the following:
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Original:  National health authorities in each country should recommend one, specific, universal infant feeding practice for gestational parents with HIV, as gestational parents will need persistent counselling while feeding their infants and this is better promoted when national authorities are unified in the guidance they administer.
Revised:  National health authorities in each country should recommend one, specific, universal infant feeding practice for mothers with HIV, as gestational parents will need persistent counselling while feeding their infants and this is better promoted when national authorities are unified in the guidance they administer.
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Original:  National health authorities in each country should recommend one, specific, universal infant feeding practice for gestational parents with HIV, as gestational parents will need persistent counselling while feeding their infants and this is better promoted when national authorities are unified in the guidance they administer.
Revised:  National health authorities in each country should recommend one, specific, universal infant feeding practice for gestational parents with HIV, as mothers will need persistent counselling while feeding their infants and this is better promoted when national authorities are unified in the guidance they administer.
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Original:  In developing nations, If the gestational parent has a high HIV viral load (HIV RNA more than 1000 copies/L), replacement feeding with formula is only initiated as per the UNAIDS guidelines, termed the AFASS criteria, "where replacement feeding is acceptable, feasible, affordable, sustainable, and safe."
Revised:  In developing nations, If the mother has a high HIV viral load (HIV RNA more than 1000 copies/L), replacement feeding with formula is only initiated as per the UNAIDS guidelines, termed the AFASS criteria, "where replacement feeding is acceptable, feasible, affordable, sustainable, and safe."
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Original: :95-6 A gestational parent should only give infant formula, as explained by the WHO, if the following conditions are met: "Safe water and sanitation are assured at the household level and in the community;
Revised: :95-6 A mother should only give infant formula, as explained by the WHO, if the following conditions are met: "Safe water and sanitation are assured at the household level and in the community;
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Original:  and the gestational parent or other caregiver can reliably provide sufficient infant formula milk to support the normal growth and development of the infant;
Revised:  and the mother or other caregiver can reliably provide sufficient infant formula milk to support the normal growth and development of the infant;
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Original:  and the gestational parent or caregiver can prepare it cleanly and frequently enough so that it is safe and carries a low risk of diarrhea and malnutrition;
Revised:  and the mother or caregiver can prepare it cleanly and frequently enough so that it is safe and carries a low risk of diarrhea and malnutrition;
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Original:  and the gestational parent or caregiver can exclusively give infant formula milk in the first six months;
Revised:  and the mother or caregiver can exclusively give infant formula milk in the first six months;
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Original:  and the gestational parent or caregiver can access health care that offers comprehensive child health services."
Revised:  and the mother or caregiver can access health care that offers comprehensive child health services."
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Original:  Compulsory sterilisation in an attempt to limit gestational parent-to-child transmission has been practiced in Africa, Asia, and Latin American. women are forced to undergo sterilisation without their knowledge or informed consent, and misinformation and incentives are often used in order to coerce them into accepting the procedure.
Revised:  Compulsory sterilisation in an attempt to limit mother-to-child transmission has been practiced in Africa, Asia, and Latin American. women are forced to undergo sterilisation without their knowledge or informed consent, and misinformation and incentives are often used in order to coerce them into accepting the procedure.
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Original:  The comorbidities may have serious adverse effects on the gestational parent and child during pregnancy, so it is extremely important to identify them early during the pregnancy.
Revised:  The comorbidities may have serious adverse effects on the mother and child during pregnancy, so it is extremely important to identify them early during the pregnancy.
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Original:  If an individual with uterus chooses to decline testing, she will not receive the test.
Revised:  If a woman chooses to decline testing, she will not receive the test.
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Original:  The LM & Others v Government of Namibia case is the first of its kind in sub-Saharan African to deal with coerced sterilisation of HIV-positive woman .
Revised:  The LM & Others v Government of Namibia case is the first of its kind in sub-Saharan African to deal with coerced sterilisation of HIV-positive women .
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Original:  most notably the HPTN052 clinical trial, the PARTNER study, the PARTNER2 study, and the Opposites Attract Study  The NIH therefore advises that HIV positive people who maintain an undetectable viral load via adherence to long-term ART therapy can attempt conception via condomless sex with minimal risk of disease transmission to the HIV negative partner.
Revised:  most notably the HPTN052 clinical trial, the PARTNER study, the PARTNER2 study, and the Opposites Attract Study . The NIH therefore advises that HIV positive people who maintain an undetectable viral load via adherence to long-term ART therapy can attempt conception via condomless sex with minimal risk of disease transmission to the HIV negative partner.
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Original:  One difficulty, then, in prescribing glasses to an individual with a disparity in refractive error between the two eyes is that a disparity in image size between the two eyes may be created . Knapp's Rule states that lenses placed at the anterior focal point of the eye, generally 15 mm in front of the eye, will create similarly sized images on the retina, whenever the disparity between the two eyes is due to a difference in axial length of the eyes .
Revised:  One difficulty, then, in prescribing glasses to an individual with a disparity in refractive error between the two eyes is that a disparity in image size between the two eyes may be created Knapp's Rule states that lenses placed at the anterior focal point of the eye, generally 15 mm in front of the eye, will create similarly sized images on the retina, whenever the disparity between the two eyes is due to a difference in axial length of the eyes .
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Original:  One difficulty, then, in prescribing glasses to an individual with a disparity in refractive error between the two eyes is that a disparity in image size between the two eyes may be created . Knapp's Rule states that lenses placed at the anterior focal point of the eye, generally 15 mm in front of the eye, will create similarly sized images on the retina, whenever the disparity between the two eyes is due to a difference in axial length of the eyes .
Revised:  One difficulty, then, in prescribing glasses to an individual with a disparity in refractive error between the two eyes is that a disparity in image size between the two eyes may be created . .
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Original: When a refractive error is corrected with spectacle lenses, the retinal images changes size.
Revised: When a refractive error is corrected with spectacle lenses, the retinal images change size.
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Original:  There is some controversy as to the soundness of Knapp's Rul 
Revised:  There is some controversy as to the soundness of Knapp's Rule. 
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Original: The 1995 roster matched Frazier with a number of running backs that included Lawrence Phillips, Ahman Green, Clinton Childs, Damon Benning, Jeff Makovicka, and Jay Sims, to form a backfield that set an NCAA record 7.0 yards per rushing attempt.
Revised: The 1995 roster matched Frazier with a number of running backs that included Lawrence Phillips, Ahman Green, Clinton Childs, Damon Benning, Joel Makovicka, and Jay Sims, to form a backfield that set an NCAA record 7.0 yards per rushing attempt.
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Original:  "And after playing brilliantly in both Nebraska's 18-16 Orange Bowl loss to Florida State in 1994 and the Cornhuskers' 24-17 national-title victory over Miami last season, he must now be considered one of the best big-game quarterbacks in college football history— its Tommie Fraizer."
Revised:  "And after playing brilliantly in both Nebraska's 18-16 Orange Bowl loss to Florida State in 1994 and the Cornhuskers' 24-17 national-title victory over Miami last season, he must now be considered one of the best big-game quarterbacks in college football history— it’s Tommie Fraizer."
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Original:  "Oh listen, I had a great career at Nebraska," Frazier said as this gave the South Floridian the opportunity to open up with gratitude, giving back to the Cornhusker fan base.
Revised:  "Oh listen, I had a great career at Nebraska," Frazier said as this gave the Floridian the opportunity to open up with gratitude, giving back to the Cornhusker fan base.
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Original: Pentz, Perry D. "Been there, done that", Sarasota Herald-Tribune, Prep Football, 2G, Friday, August 27, 1999 Frazier is married to the former Andrea Stephens , originally from Sioux Falls, South Dakota.
Revised: Pentz, Perry D. "Been there, done that", Sarasota Herald-Tribune, Prep Football, 2G, Friday, August 27, 1999 Frazier is married to the Andrea (Stephens) Frazier , originally from Sioux Falls, South Dakota.
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Original:  He completed 13-of-19 passes for 145 yards and an 11-yard touchdown pass in a 14-13 victory over the Bruins  who had the Pac-10's top pass defense.
Revised:  He completed 13-of-19 passes for 145 yards and an 11-yard touchdown pass in a 14-13 victory over the Bruins , who had the Pac-10's top pass defense.
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Original:  Due primarily to health issues, Frazier was not drafted by the NFL , but received an offer from the Montreal Alouettes of the Canadian Football League.
Revised:  Due primarily to health issues, Frazier went unselected in the NFL Draft , but received an offer from the Montreal Alouettes of the Canadian Football League.
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Original: All-American college football players Category:College Football Hall of Fame inductees Category:Sportspeople from Bradenton, Florida Category:Players of American football from Florida Category:African-American coaches of American football Category:African-American players of American football Category:African-American players of Canadian football Category:People from Palmetto, Florida Category:People with Crohn's disease Category:21st-century African-American  peop
Revised: All-American college football players Category:College Football Hall of Fame inductees Category:Sportspeople from Bradenton, Florida Category:Players of American football from Florida Category:African-American coaches of American football Category:African-American players of American football Category:African-American players of Canadian football Category:People from Palmetto, Florida Category:People with Crohn's disease Category:21st-century African-American people Category:20th-century African-American peop
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Original:  24 November 189812 November 1969) was a Chinese revolutionary, politician , and theorist .
Revised:  24 November 189812 November 1969) was a Chinese revolutionary, politician .
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Original: For 15 years, Liu was the third most powerful man in China, behind only Chairman Mao Zedong and Premier Zhou Enlai .
Revised: For 15 years, Liu was the third most powerful man in China, behind only Chairman Mao Zedong .
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Original: Scales used to measure maximization Given the disagreement over the definition of maximizing, as well as attempts to increase the reliability of existing measures, several scales have been created to measure maximization.
Revised: Scales used to measure Given the disagreement over the definition of maximizing, as well as attempts to increase the reliability of existing measures, several scales have been created to measure maximization.
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Original: More recent research on maximization has identified three major components of the trait of maximization :Nenkov, G. Y., Morrin, M., Ward, A., Schwartz, B., & Hulland, J. (2008).
Revised: More recent research on maximization has identified three major components :Nenkov, G. Y., Morrin, M., Ward, A., Schwartz, B., & Hulland, J. (2008).
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Original:  Revised MS and MTS: Same components as the original scales above Recently, Cheek and Schwartz (2016) reviewed the vast literature on the measurement of maximization and proposed a two-component model of maximization in order to clarify what it means to be a maximizer.
Revised:  Revised MS and MTS: Same components as the original scales above Cheek and Schwartz (2016) reviewed the vast literature on the measurement of maximization and proposed a two-component model of maximization in order to clarify what it means to be a maximizer.
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Original:  Revised MS and MTS: Same components as the original scales above Recently, Cheek and Schwartz (2016) reviewed the vast literature on the measurement of maximization and proposed a two-component model of maximization in order to clarify what it means to be a maximizer.
Revised:  Revised MS and MTS: Same components as the original scales above Recently, Cheek and Schwartz (2016) reviewed the literature on the measurement of maximization and proposed a two-component model of maximization in order to clarify what it means to be a maximizer.
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Original:  Many of these attempts to define maximizing have resulted in the creation of new psychological scales to measure the trait "correctly" .
Revised:  Many of these attempts to define maximizing have resulted in the creation of new psychological scales to measure the trait .
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Original: Jayshree Khadilkar Pande ( ;
Revised: Jayshree Khadilkar Pande ( 
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Original:  Press Information Bureau, Government of India. and won four times the Indian women's championship  . [[File:Khaldikar Schwestern 1980 Malta.
Revised:  Press Information Bureau, Government of India. and won the Indian women's championship . [[File:Khaldikar Schwestern 1980 Malta.
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Original:  An ethnic Buryat-Mongolian Hamnigan Evenk, Nomokonov was among the indigenous peoples of Russia who fought in the war.
Revised:  An ethnic Hamnigan Evenk, Nomokonov was among the indigenous peoples of Russia who fought in the war.
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Original: Semyon Danilovich Nomokonov (  12 August 1900 – 12 June or 15 July 1973) was a Soviet sniper during World War II , credited with 367 kills , recorded in his sniper log .
Revised: Semyon Danilovich Nomokonov ( ; 12 August 1900 – 12 June or 15 July 1973) was a Soviet sniper during World War II , credited with 367 kills , recorded in his sniper log .
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Original: Semyon Danilovich Nomokonov (  12 August 1900 – 12 June or 15 July 1973) was a Soviet sniper during World War II , credited with 367 kills , recorded in his sniper log .
Revised: Semyon Danilovich Nomokonov ( 12 August 1900 – 15 July 1973) was a Soviet sniper during World War II , credited with 367 kills , recorded in his sniper log .
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Original: Semyon Danilovich Nomokonov (  12 August 1900 – 12 June or 15 July 1973) was a Soviet sniper during World War II , credited with 367 kills , recorded in his sniper log .
Revised: Semyon Danilovich Nomokonov ( 12 August 1900 – 12 June or 15 July 1973) was a Soviet sniper during World War II credited with 367 kills , recorded in his sniper log .
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Original: Semyon Danilovich Nomokonov (  12 August 1900 – 12 June or 15 July 1973) was a Soviet sniper during World War II , credited with 367 kills , recorded in his sniper log .
Revised: Semyon Danilovich Nomokonov ( 12 August 1900 – 12 June or 15 July 1973) was a Soviet sniper during World War II , credited with 367 kills .
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Original:  He received the nickname Taiga Shaman from the enemies.
Revised:  He received the nickname "Taiga Shaman" from enemies.
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Original:  Nomokonov was awarded two Orders of the Red Star, Order of the Red Banner, Order of Lenin and medals.
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Original:  See also Fyodor Okhlopkov Aliya Moldagulova 
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Original:  It is extremely important to note that while babies can imitate swimming motions and reflexes, they are not yet physically capable of swimming.
Revised:  Babies can imitate swimming motions and reflexes, they are not yet physically capable of swimming.
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Original:  It is extremely important to note that while babies can imitate swimming motions and reflexes, they are not yet physically capable of swimming.
Revised:  It is extremely important to note that while babies can imitate swimming motions and reflexes, but are not yet physically capable of swimming.
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Original:   There may be a link between infant swimming and rhinovirus-induced wheezing illnesses.
Revised:  <ref> There may be a link between infant swimming and rhinovirus-induced wheezing illnesses.
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Original:  It is not true that babies are born with the ability to swim, though they have primitive reflexes that make it look like they are  . Babies are not old enough to hold their breath intentionally or strong enough to keep their head above water, and cannot swim unassisted.
Revised:  It is true that babies are born with the ability to swim, though they have primitive reflexes that make it look like they are . Babies are not old enough to hold their breath intentionally or strong enough to keep their head above water, and cannot swim unassisted.
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Original:  It is not true that babies are born with the ability to swim, though they have primitive reflexes that make it look like they are  . Babies are not old enough to hold their breath intentionally or strong enough to keep their head above water, and cannot swim unassisted.
Revised:  It is not true that babies are born with the ability to swim, though they have primitive reflexes that make it look like they are . Babies are not old enough to hold their breath intentionally or strong enough to keep their head above water, so it is surprising that they can swim unassisted.
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Original: Huang Huahua (born October 1946 in Xingning, Guangdong) was the Governor of Guangdong, province in the China until 2011.
Revised: Huang Huahua (born October 1946 in Xingning, Guangdong) was the Governor of Guangdong, province in China until 2011.
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Original:  Biography Huang graduated in mathematics from the Sun Yat-sen University.
Revised:  Biography Huang graduated in mathematics from Sun Yat-sen University.
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Original:  From 1970 to 1978, Huang worked at Machinery Factory of the Guangdong Coal Mine, joined the Communist Party in 1971 and served as deputy secretary of the workshop Party Branch.
Revised:  From 1970 to 1978, Huang worked at a machinery factory of the Guangdong Coal Mine, joined the Communist Party in 1971 and served as deputy secretary of the workshop Party Branch.
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Original:  Huang was deputy secretary of  CYLC provincial committee from 1982 to 1985 and then as secretary of CYLC provincial committee from 1985–1987.
Revised:  Huang was deputy secretary of the CYLC provincial committee from 1982 to 1985 and then as secretary of CYLC provincial committee from 1985–1987.
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Original:  Huang was deputy secretary of  CYLC provincial committee from 1982 to 1985 and then as secretary of CYLC provincial committee from 1985–1987.
Revised:  Huang was deputy secretary of CYLC provincial committee from 1982 to 1985 and then secretary of CYLC provincial committee from 1985–1987.
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Original: Padmakar Ramachandra Dubhashi ( born: 7 March 1930 ) is an Indian civil servant, administrator, author, social scientist and academician, known for his administrative and academic abilities.
Revised: Padmakar Ramachandra Dubhashi ( 7 March 1930 ) is an Indian civil servant, administrator, author, social scientist and academician, known for his administrative and academic abilities.
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Original: P. R. Dubhashi was born on 7 March 1930 in Karwar district of the South Indian state of Karnataka  He received a MA and a Ph.D from Pune University and a DLitt from Bombay University.
Revised: P. R. Dubhashi was born on 7 March 1930 in Karwar district of the South Indian state of Karnataka . He received a MA and a Ph.D from Pune University and a DLitt from Bombay University.
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