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Original:  According to British foreign secretary William Hague, " you need support within the region from the Arab world" for a no-fly zone , and " we would like Arab nations to participate in it militarily.
Revised:  According to British foreign secretary William Hague, " you need support within the region from the Arab world" for a no-fly zone and " we would like Arab nations to participate in it militarily.
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Original: Some 300,000 people have been evacuated from their homes in the aftermath of the disaster  ;
Revised: In the aftermath of the disaster ;
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Original:  The Japanese military has also joined rescue efforts, with 50,000 troops being deployed .
Revised:  50,000 troops being deployed .
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Original:  The Japanese military has also joined rescue efforts, with 50,000 troops being deployed .
Revised:  The Japanese military has also joined rescue efforts, with 50,000 troops from the Japanese military have been deployed to assist in rescue efforts .
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Original: According to a Cuban court, Gross's activities were part of "a subversive project of the U.S. government that aimed to destroy the Revolution through the use of communications systems out of the control of authorities."
Revised: According to a Cuban court, Gross's activities were part of "a subversive project of the US government that aimed to destroy the Revolution through the use of communications systems out of the control of authorities."
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Original:  Gross  has lost 90 pounds while imprisoned since his arrest, and suffers from ulcers, gout and arthritis
Revised:  Gross has lost 90 pounds while imprisoned since his arrest, and is affected by ulcers, gout and arthritis
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Original: An American aid worker named Alan Gross was sentenced to fifteen years in prison by a Cuban court today for alleged crimes against the state.
Revised: A 15-year prison sentence was handed down by a Cuban court today for alleged crimes against the state.
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Original:  Gross was arrested in December 2009 while apparently on a USAID mission intended to promote democracy and perhaps weaken the Cuban government by distributing satellite phones to Jewish groups;
Revised:  Gross was arrested in December 2009 while on a USAID mission intended to promote democracy and perhaps weaken the Cuban government by distributing satellite phones to Jewish groups;
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Original:  Gross was arrested in December 2009 while apparently on a USAID mission intended to promote democracy and perhaps weaken the Cuban government by distributing satellite phones to Jewish groups;
Revised:  Gross was arrested in December 2009 while apparently on a USAID mission intended to promote democracy by distributing satellite phones to Jewish groups;
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Original:  Such actions are illegal in Cuba.
Revised:  Such equipment, and distributing it, is illegal in Cuba.
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Original:  In response to the decision, a US National Security Council spokesperson said that the "sentencing adds another injustice to Alan Gross’s ordeal . ...
Revised:  In response to the decision, a US National Security Council spokesperson said that the "sentencing adds another injustice to Alan Gross’s ordeal .
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Original:  Gross, aged 61, has lost 90 pounds while imprisoned since his arrest, and is affected by ulcers, gout and arthritis
Revised:  Gross, aged 61, is reported to have lost 90 pounds while imprisoned since his arrest, and is affected by ulcers, gout and arthritis
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Original:  Before dawn, security troops attacked protesters in the capitol city of Sana'a after  surrounding a central square where they were located several hours earlier .
Revised:  Before dawn, security troops attacked protesters in the capitol city of Sana'a after several hours earlier surrounding a central square where they were located several hours earlier .
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Original:  Before dawn, security troops attacked protesters in the capitol city of Sana'a after  surrounding a central square where they were located several hours earlier .
Revised:  Before dawn, security troops attacked protesters in the capitol city of Sana'a after surrounding a central square where they were located .
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Original:  In 2007 President George W. Bush bestowed upon him the Medal of Freedom, American's highest civilian honor, in recognition of his peaceful resistance and his advocacy of human rights.
Revised:  In 2007 President George W. Bush bestowed upon him the Medal of Freedom, American's highest civilian honor, in recognition of his peaceful resistance and his work for human rights.
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Original:  In 2007 President George W. Bush bestowed upon him the Medal of Freedom, American's highest civilian honor, in recognition of his peaceful resistance and his workfor human rights .
Revised:  In 2007 President George W. Bush bestowed upon him the Medal of Freedom, American's highest civilian honor, in recognition of his work .
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Original: The Cuban government released one of the country's leading dissidents Óscar Elías Biscet from prison on Friday under an agreement  reached last July between Cuba's president Raul Castro and the Catholic Church to free 52 political prisoners.
Revised: The Cuban government released one of the country's leading dissidents Óscar Elías Biscet from prison on Friday under an agreement reached last July between Cuba's president Raul Castro and Cuba's Catholic Church to free 52 political prisoners.
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Original:  Biscet, 49, had been sentenced to a 25-year prison term in 2003 for "acts against the sovereignty and independence of the national territory".
Revised:  Biscet, 49, was sentenced to a 25-year prison term in 2003 for "acts against the sovereignty and independence of the national territory".
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Original:  He has stated, "I have always lived in Cuba , Iam from Cuba.  " 
Revised:  He stated, "I have always lived in Cuba , Iam from Cuba. " 
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Original:  He has stated, "I have always lived in Cuba , Iam from Cuba.  " 
Revised:  He has stated, "I ’ve always lived in Cuba , Iam from Cuba. " 
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Original:  He has stated, "I have always lived in Cuba , Iam from Cuba.  " 
Revised:  He has stated, "I have always lived in Cuba and I’m from Cuba. " 
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Original:  He has stated, "I have always lived in Cuba , Iam from Cuba.  " 
Revised:  He has stated, "I have always lived in Cuba , Iam from Cuba. " .
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Original: The Cuban government released one of the country's leading dissidents Óscar Elías Biscet from prison on Friday  under an agreement  supported by Spain and reached last July between Cuba's president Raul Castro and Cuba's Catholic Church to free 52 political prisoners.
Revised: The Cuban government released one of the country's leading dissidents Óscar Elías Biscet from prison on Friday , under an agreement supported by Spain and reached last July between Cuba's president Raul Castro and Cuba's Catholic Church to free 52 political prisoners.
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Original:  I’ve always given love, a lot of love, and for giving love they came down hard on me, especially the government"   .
Revised:  I’ve always given love, a lot of love, and for giving love they came down hard on me, especially the government" . .
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Original: A follower of the peacefully resistant philosophies of Gandhi and Martin Luther King , Biscet's nonviolent fight for human rights and his persistent opposition to the Cuban government have won him worldwide prominence.
Revised: A follower of the peacefully resistant philosophies of and , Biscet's nonviolent fight for human rights and his persistent opposition to the Cuban government have won him worldwide prominence.
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Original:  In 2007 President George W. Bush bestowed upon him the Medal of Freedom , American's highest civilian honor, in recognition of his work.
Revised:  In 2007 bestowed upon him the Medal of Freedom , American's highest civilian honor, in recognition of his work.
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Original:  In 2007 President George W. Bush bestowed upon him the Medal of Freedom , American's highest civilian honor, in recognition of his work.
Revised:  In 2007 President George W. Bush bestowed upon him the , American's highest civilian honor, in recognition of his work.
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Original:  Biscet was escorted by security agents to his home in Havana .
Revised:  Biscet was escorted by security agents to his home in .
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Original:  The casualties are said to consist of  insurgents and local villagers.
Revised:  The casualties are said to consist of both insurgents and local villagers.
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Original:  Thanksin said that the insurgents who are believed to be separatists demonstrated "strong coordination" in the attacks, he stated that the authorities in the area should have new measures in place by November to aggressively address the issue.
Revised:  Thanksin said that the suspected separatists demonstrated "strong coordination" in the attacks, he stated that the authorities in the area should have new measures in place by November to aggressively address the issue.
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Original:  Despite strong words on the issue , the Prime Minister emphasised that, "the government will exercise most restraint and patience", and that the government's objective was to bring peace to the region
Revised:  Despite strong words on the matter , the Prime Minister emphasised that, "the government will exercise most restraint and patience", and that the government's objective was to bring peace to the region
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Original: Thanksin said that the suspected separatists demonstrated "strong coordination" in the attacks, he stated that the authorities in the area should have new measures in place by November to aggressively address the issue.
Revised: Thaksin said that the suspected separatists demonstrated "strong coordination" in the attacks, he stated that the authorities in the area should have new measures in place by November to aggressively address the issue.
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Original:  Despite strong words on the matter, the Prime Minister emphasised that, "the government will exercise most restraint and patience", and that the government's objective was to bring peace to the region
Revised:  Despite strong words on the matter, the Prime Minister emphasized that, "the government will exercise most restraint and patience", and that the government's objective was to bring peace to the region
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Original: Thai Prime Minister, Thaksin Shiniwatra, told journalists attending his weekly press conference that the government would be more aggressive in measures taken to counter insurgency in the country's provinces on the southern border with Malaysia.
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Original:  His statement followed coordinated attacks by suspected militants in the provinces of Yala, Narathiwat, and Pattani.
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Original: Since there was no record of how she might interpret the constitution , members of the Senate demanded detailed written replies to a series of questions probing her past.
Revised: Since there was no record of how she might interpret the Constitution , members of the Senate demanded detailed written replies to a series of questions probing her past.
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Original:  In a letter dated October 27, 2005, to President Bush, She cited claims that "members of the Senate have indicated their intention to seek documents about my service in the White House," and that acknowledged that she "would be expected to testify about my service in the White House."
Revised:  In a letter dated October 27, to President Bush, She cited claims that "members of the Senate have indicated their intention to seek documents about my service in the White House," and that acknowledged that she "would be expected to testify about my service in the White House."
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Original:  In a letter dated October 27, 2005, to President Bush, She cited claims that "members of the Senate have indicated their intention to seek documents about my service in the White House," and that acknowledged that she "would be expected to testify about my service in the White House."
Revised:  In a letter dated October 27, 2005, to President Bush, she claimed that "members of the Senate have indicated their intention to seek documents about my service in the White House," and that acknowledged that she "would be expected to testify about my service in the White House."
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Original:  In a letter dated October 27, 2005, to President Bush, She cited claims that "members of the Senate have indicated their intention to seek documents about my service in the White House," and that acknowledged that she "would be expected to testify about my service in the White House."
Revised:  In a letter dated October 27, 2005, to President Bush, She cited claims that "members of the Senate have indicated their intention to seek documents about my service in the White House," and that she "would be expected to testify about my service in the White House."
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Original: Faced with mounting criticism of his nominee from numerous disparate organizations, within and without his party, President Bush acknowledged her resignation and critics by saying "It is clear that senators would not be satisfied until they gained access to internal documents concerning advice provided during her tenure at the White House — disclosures that would undermine a President's ability to receive candid counsel.
Revised: Faced with mounting criticism of his nominee from numerous disparate organizations, within and without his party, President Bush acknowledged her resignation and critics by saying "It is clear that Senators would not be satisfied until they gained access to internal documents concerning advice provided during her tenure at the White House — disclosures that would undermine a President's ability to receive candid counsel.
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Original: Faced with mounting criticism of his nominee from numerous disparate organizations, within and without his party, President Bush acknowledged her resignation and critics by saying "It is clear that Senators would not be satisfied until they gained access to internal documents concerning advice provided during her tenure at the White House — disclosures that would undermine a President's ability to receive candid counsel.
Revised: Faced with mounting criticism of his nominee from numerous disparate organizations, within and outside the President's Republican Party, Bush acknowledged her resignation and critics by saying "It is clear that Senators would not be satisfied until they gained access to internal documents concerning advice provided during her tenure at the White House — disclosures that would undermine a President's ability to receive candid counsel.
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Original: The Miers nomination was politically controversial because she was once a White House Counsel , and she was a personal lawyer to Bush when he was governor of Texas.
Revised: The Miers nomination was politically controversial because she is White House Counsel , and she was a personal lawyer to Bush when he was governor of Texas.
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Original: The Miers nomination was politically controversial because she was once a White House Counsel , and she was a personal lawyer to Bush when he was governor of Texas.
Revised: The Miers nomination was politically controversial because she was once a White House Counsel and she was a personal lawyer to Bush when he was governor of Texas.
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Original:  The crash occurred on at approximately 0535 (1035 ) on Sunday  . 40-year-old Ophadell Williams, the driver of the bus, reported to the police that the vehicle came into contact with a , which was veering across the interstate.
Revised:  When the crash occurred on at approximately 0535 (1035 ) on Sunday . 40-year-old Ophadell Williams, the driver of the bus, reported to the police that the vehicle came into contact with a , which was veering across the interstate.
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Original:  Jose Hernandez, one of the survivors of the bus crash, said that "[w]e tried to help people, but there was twisted metal in the way"  
Revised:  Jose Hernandez, one of the survivors of the bus crash, said that "[w]e tried to help people, but there was twisted metal in the way" . 
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Original:  When the crash occurred on at approximately 0535 (1035 ) on Sunday , there were at least thirty-one passengers present.
Revised:  When the crash occurred on at approximately 0535 (1035 ) on Sunday . There were at least thirty-one passengers present.
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Original:   , the current , stated that the truck was moving on a lane to the bus' nearside, although whether the vehicles came into contact with each other or not is yet to be confirmed.
Revised:  Raymond Kelly , the current , stated that the truck was moving on a lane to the bus' nearside, although whether the vehicles came into contact with each other or not is yet to be confirmed.
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Original: Amongst the aftermath of a magintude 8.9 earthquake which struck on Friday,  , the current of Japan, has claimed that the country is experiencing its largest difficulties since the discontinuance of in 1945.
Revised: Amongst the aftermath of a magnitude 8.9 earthquake which struck on Friday, , the current of Japan, has claimed that the country is experiencing its largest difficulties since the discontinuance of in 1945.
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Original:  Kan reported that there were limited supplies of electricity due to the closure of numerous , including located in . According to , a broadcasting organization in Japan,  310,000 individuals have been transported to safety in shelters that, in various cases, do not contain electricity.
Revised:  Kan reported that there were limited supplies of electricity due to the closure of numerous , including located in . According to , a broadcasting organization in Japan, approximately 310,000 individuals have been transported to safety in shelters that, in various cases, do not contain electricity.
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Original: Amongst the aftermath of a magnitude 8.9 earthquake which struck on Friday, followed by a tsunami, , the current of Japan, has claimed that the country is experiencing its largest difficulties since the end of World War II in 1945.
Revised: Amongst the aftermath of a magnitude 8.9 earthquake which struck on Friday, followed by a tsunami, , the of Japan, has claimed that the country is experiencing its largest difficulties since the end of World War II in 1945.
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Original: Amongst the aftermath of a magnitude 8.9 earthquake which struck on Friday, followed by a tsunami, , the current of Japan, has claimed that the country is experiencing its largest difficulties since the end of World War II in 1945.
Revised: Amongst the aftermath of a magnitude 8.9 earthquake which struck on Friday, followed by a tsunami, , the current of Japan, claimed that the country is experiencing its largest difficulties since the end of World War II in 1945.
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Original:  "The current situation of the earthquake, tsunami and the nuclear plants is in a way the most severe crisis in the past 65 years since World War II," Kan stated . Speaking on television, he stated that "[w]hether we Japanese can overcome this crisis depends on each of us.
Revised:  "The current situation of the earthquake, tsunami and the nuclear plants is in a way the most severe crisis in the past 65 years since World War II," Kan said . Speaking on television, he stated that "[w]hether we Japanese can overcome this crisis depends on each of us.
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Original:  in February fourteen of the fifteen United Nations Security Council members, with the US the only exception, supported a resolution that would demand Israel stop further construction.
Revised:  in February fourteen of the fifteen members, with the US the only exception, supported a resolution that would demand Israel stop further construction.
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Original:  The attacks were referenced by Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu , who said in a statement that he had "noticed that several countries that always hasten to the U.N. Security Council in order to condemn Israel, the state of the Jews, for planning a house in some locality, or for laying some tiles somewhere, have been dilatory in sharply condemning the murder of Jewish infants.
Revised:  The attacks were referenced by Prime Minister , who said in a statement that he had "noticed that several countries that always hasten to the U.N. Security Council in order to condemn Israel, the state of the Jews, for planning a house in some locality, or for laying some tiles somewhere, have been dilatory in sharply condemning the murder of Jewish infants.
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Original:  Calling the research a "potential breakthrough", the team says it is the first firm evidence of a genetic element to the potentially fatal condition    
Revised:  Calling the research a "potential breakthrough", the team says it is the first firm evidence of a genetic element to the potentially fatal condition . 
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Original:  An international research team at in Scotland has established a gene called is linked to peanut allergies.
Revised: Peanuts: Delicious to many, but deadly to some An international research team at in Scotland has established a gene called is linked to peanut allergies.
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Original:  " " We knew that people with a Filaggrin defect were likely to suffer from eczema, and that many of those people also had peanut allergy," he explained.
Revised:  " We knew that people with a Filaggrin defect were likely to suffer from eczema, and that many of those people also had peanut allergy," he explained.
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Original:  At a conference called "The World without Zionism", the recently elected Iranian president Ahmadinejad said the establishment of Israel was, "a move by the world oppressor against the Islamic world," an apparent reference to Western military and political pressure in the Middle East .
Revised:  At a conference called "The World without Zionism", the recently elected Iranian president Ahmadinejad said the establishment of Israel was, "a move by the world oppressor against the Islamic world," a reference to Western military and political pressure in the Middle East .
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Original:  At a conference called "The World without Zionism", the recently elected Iranian president Ahmadinejad said the establishment of Israel was, "a move by the world oppressor against the Islamic world," an apparent reference to Western military and political pressure in the Middle East .
Revised:  At a conference called "The World without Zionism", the recently elected Iranian president Ahmadinejad said the establishment of Israel was, "a move by the world oppressor against the Islamic world," an apparent reference to Western military and political pressure .
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Original:  In statements released by his secretary on Thursday, Annan, who's plans still include a visit to Iran within a month, said he would "place the Middle East peace process, and the right of all states in the area to live in peace within secure and recognized boundaries free from threats or acts of force, at the top of his agenda for that visit."
Revised:  In statements released by his secretary on Thursday, Annan, whose plans still include a visit to Iran within a month, said he would "place the Middle East peace process, and the right of all states in the area to live in peace within secure and recognized boundaries free from threats or acts of force, at the top of his agenda for that visit."
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