wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  This class of models captures important empirical features of animal and human displacements.
Revised:  Our results may have important applications in the study of animal and human displacements.
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Original: Building upon the standard model of monopolistic competition on the market for intermediary goods, we propose a simple dynamical model of the formation of production networks  .
Revised: We propose a simple dynamical model of the formation of production networks .
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Original: Building upon the standard model of monopolistic competition on the market for intermediary goods, we propose a simple dynamical model of the formation of production networks  .
Revised: Building upon the standard model of monopolistic competition on the market for intermediary goods, we propose a simple dynamical model of the formation of production networks among monopolistically competitive firms .
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Original: Malaria is a mosquito-borne, lethal disease that  kills hundreds of thousands  each year.
Revised: Malaria is a mosquito-borne, lethal disease that kills hundreds of thousands of people each year.
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Original:  In this paper, we develop a model for allocating malaria interventions across geographic regions and time, subject to budget constraints, to minimize the number of person-days of malaria infection.
Revised:  In this paper, we develop a model for allocating malaria interventions across geographic regions and time, subject to budget constraints, with the aim of minimizing the number of person-days of malaria infection.
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Original:  The model considers a range of  climatic characteristics, treatment efficacy, distribution costs, and treatment coverage.
Revised:  The model considers a range of several conditions: climatic characteristics, treatment efficacy, distribution costs, and treatment coverage.
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Original:  Our model identifies which combination of interventions, with which level of coverage, to use in each region and year in a five-year planning horizon.
Revised:  Our model produces an intervention plan for all regions, identifying which combination of interventions, with which level of coverage, to use in each region and year in a five-year planning horizon.
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Original:  Simulations yield qualitative insights on optimal interventions : The optimal policy is different when considering a five-year time horizon than  a single year, due to the effects that interventions have on the disease transmission dynamics.
Revised:  Simulations yield qualitative insights on optimal intervention policies : The optimal policy is different when considering a five-year time horizon than a single year, due to the effects that interventions have on the disease transmission dynamics.
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Original:  Simulations yield qualitative insights on optimal interventions : The optimal policy is different when considering a five-year time horizon than  a single year, due to the effects that interventions have on the disease transmission dynamics.
Revised:  Simulations yield qualitative insights on optimal interventions : The optimal policy is different when considering a five-year time horizon than when considering only a single year, due to the effects that interventions have on the disease transmission dynamics.
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Original:  We also examine important topics associated with common pointer use such as dynamic memory allocation, reference by pointer/address, casting, and building various data structures in the context of secure multi-party computation.
Revised:  Besides dynamic memory allocation, we examine other important topics associated with common pointer use such as dynamic memory allocation, reference by pointer/address, casting, and building various data structures in the context of secure multi-party computation.
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Original:  We also examine important topics associated with common pointer use such as dynamic memory allocation, reference by pointer/address, casting, and building various data structures in the context of secure multi-party computation.
Revised:  We also examine important topics associated with common pointer use such as reference by pointer/address, casting, and building various data structures in the context of secure multi-party computation.
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Original:  Finally, we explore some implications of the results: (i) we describe the representations learned by a neural network game-theoretically ;
Revised:  Finally, we explore some implications of the results: (i) we describe the representations learned by a neural network game-theoretically ,
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Original:  (ii) propose a learning setting at the level of individual units that can be plugged into deep architectures ;
Revised:  (ii) propose a learning setting at the level of individual units that can be plugged into deep architectures ,
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Original:  However, the high gait variability induced by VC should be considered.
Revised:  However, the increased gait variability induced by VC should be considered.
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Original:  Applications of these results to theories of speciation, population genetic engineering, and general dynamical systems are described.
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Original: We develop a generalized proximal quasi-Newton method for handling " dirty " statistical models where multiple structural constraints are imposed.
Revised: We develop a generalized proximal quasi-Newton method for handling " dirty " models where multiple structural constraints are imposed.
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Original:  By employing the smoothed conic dual approach with a quasi-LBFGS updating formula, we obtain a scalable and extensible proximal quasi-Newton (SEP-QN) method.
Revised:  By employing the smoothed conic dual approach with the LBFGS updating formula, we obtain a scalable and extensible proximal quasi-Newton (SEP-QN) method.
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Original:  By employing the smoothed conic dual approach with a quasi-LBFGS updating formula, we obtain a scalable and extensible proximal quasi-Newton (SEP-QN) method.
Revised:  By employing the smoothed conic dual approach with a quasi-LBFGS updating formula, we propose a scalable and extensible proximal quasi-Newton (SEP-QN) method.
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Original:  Our method is potentially powerful because it can solve some popular " dirty " statistical models like the fused sparse group lasso with superlinear convergence rate .
Revised:  Our method is potentially powerful , and achieves super-linear convergence rate for optimizing some popular " dirty " statistical models like the fused sparse group lasso with superlinear convergence rate .
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Original:  Our method is potentially powerful because it can solve some popular " dirty " statistical models like the fused sparse group lasso with superlinear convergence rate .
Revised:  Our method is potentially powerful because it can solve some popular " dirty " statistical models such as the fused sparse group lasso with superlinear convergence rate .
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Original:  Our method is potentially powerful because it can solve some popular " dirty " statistical models like the fused sparse group lasso with superlinear convergence rate .
Revised:  Our method is potentially powerful because it can solve some popular " dirty " statistical models like the fused sparse group lasso .
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Original: The sequence quality of reference genome databases is essential for the accurate definition of regulatory DNA segments as candidate human specific regulatory sequences (HSRS) . It is unclear how database improvements would affect the validity of the HSRS definition .
Revised: Thousands of candidate human-specific regulatory sequences (HSRS) . It is unclear how database improvements would affect the validity of the HSRS definition .
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Original:  Here, sequence conservation analysis of 15,371 candidate HSRS was carried out using the most recent releases of reference genomes databases of humans and nonhuman primates (NHP) defining the conservation threshold as the minimum ratio of bases that must remap of 1.00.
Revised:  Here, sequence conservation analysis of 15,371 candidate HSRS was carried out based on definition of the sequence conservation threshold as the minimum ratio of bases that must remap of 1.00.
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Original:  77.1\%) of human accelerated DNase hypersensitive sites represents highly conserved in humans and NHP regulatory sequences lacking evidence of human-specific mutations . Present analysis revealed a major database refinements effect on the validity of HSRS definition and suggests that human-specific phenotypes may evolve as a results of integration into human-specific genomic regulatory networks of both conserved in NHP and human-specific genomic regulatory elements.
Revised:  77.1\%) of human accelerated DNase hypersensitive sites represents highly conserved in humans and NHP regulatory sequences lacking evidence of human-specific mutations . Present analysis revealed a major database refinements effect on the validity of HSRS definition and suggests that human-specific genomic regulatory networks of both conserved in NHP and human-specific genomic regulatory elements.
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Original:  77.1\%) of human accelerated DNase hypersensitive sites represents highly conserved in humans and NHP regulatory sequences lacking evidence of human-specific mutations . Present analysis revealed a major database refinements effect on the validity of HSRS definition and suggests that human-specific phenotypes may evolve as a results of integration into human-specific genomic regulatory networks of both conserved in NHP and human-specific genomic regulatory elements.
Revised:  77.1\%) of human accelerated DNase hypersensitive sites represents highly conserved in humans and NHP regulatory sequences lacking evidence of human-specific mutations . Present analysis revealed a major database refinements effect on the validity of HSRS definition and suggests that human-specific phenotypes may evolve as a results of integration into human-specific genomic regulatory networks of both conserved in NHP and human-specific insertions of transposable elements.
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Original:  we show that at the peak of the specific heat (the %DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% most critical state ) the spin correlations are minimally shaped by the underlying structural network, hence it is not surprising that the best match  is obtained at the onset of criticality .
Revised:  we show that at the peak of the specific heat (the %DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% ) the spin correlations are minimally shaped by the underlying structural network, hence it is not surprising that the best match is obtained at the onset of criticality .
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Original:  we show that at the peak of the specific heat (the %DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% most critical state ) the spin correlations are minimally shaped by the underlying structural network, hence it is not surprising that the best match  is obtained at the onset of criticality .
Revised:  we show that at the peak of the specific heat (the %DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% most critical state ) the spin correlations are minimally shaped by the underlying structural network, explaining how the best match is obtained at the onset of criticality .
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Original:  we show that at the peak of the specific heat (the %DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% most critical state ) the spin correlations are minimally shaped by the underlying structural network, hence it is not surprising that the best match  is obtained at the onset of criticality .
Revised:  we show that at the peak of the specific heat (the %DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% most critical state ) the spin correlations are minimally shaped by the underlying structural network, hence it is not surprising that the best match between structure and function is obtained at the onset of criticality .
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Original: We consider  utility maximisation problem for exponential Levy models and HARA utilities in presence of illiquid asset  .
Revised: We consider utility maximisation problem for exponential Levy models and HARA utilities in presence of illiquid asset in portfolio .
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Original:  Under some hypothesis on Levy processes, we give the expressions for information processes figured in maximum utility formula.
Revised:  Under some hypothesis on Levy processes, we give the expressions of information processes figured in maximum utility formula.
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Original:  The mechanism of threshold variation is still not fully understood .
Revised:  The mechanism of threshold variability is still unclear .
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Original:  Therefore, the threshold evolving equation versus time is naturally deduced from the separatrix , and can be simplified to the previously assumed threshold equation for a specific case .
Revised:  Therefore, the threshold evolving equation versus time is naturally deduced from the separatrix .
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Original:  In the view of neuron dynamics, the threshold variation is determined by crossing the separatrix at different sites.
Revised:  In the view of neuron dynamics, the threshold voltage variation with different stimulus is determined by crossing the separatrix at different sites.
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Original:  We then use the separatrix-crossing mechanism to explain, in detail, the threshold phenomena following stimulus off in  four example models, three of which have analytic separatrices and threshold equations, and one of which verified the validity of separatrix-crossing mechanism in real conductance-based neuron model.
Revised:  We then use the separatrix-crossing mechanism in four example models, three of which have analytic separatrices and threshold equations, and one of which verified the validity of separatrix-crossing mechanism in real conductance-based neuron model.
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Original:  Our theory provides a general idea of the neural threshold and will facilitate the understanding of the nature of threshold variability.
Revised:  Our theory provides a general thought of the neuronal threshold and will facilitate the understanding of the nature of threshold variability.
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Original:  Our theory provides a general idea of the neural threshold and will facilitate the understanding of the nature of threshold variability.
Revised:  Our theory provides a general idea of the neural threshold and will facilitates understanding the nature of threshold variability.
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Original: Threshold potential for action potential generation is an important regulator of neuronal signal transduction, yet the mechanism of threshold variability is still unclear .
Revised: The threshold voltage for action potential generation is an important regulator of neuronal signal transduction, yet the mechanism of threshold variability is still unclear .
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Original: Threshold potential for action potential generation is an important regulator of neuronal signal transduction, yet the mechanism of threshold variability is still unclear .
Revised: Threshold potential for action potential generation is a key regulator of neuronal signal transduction, yet the mechanism of threshold variability is still unclear .
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Original: Threshold potential for action potential generation is an important regulator of neuronal signal transduction, yet the mechanism of threshold variability is still unclear .
Revised: Threshold potential for action potential generation is an important regulator of neuronal signal transduction, yet the mechanism of its dynamic variation is still not well described .
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Original:  In this paper, we propose that threshold phenomena can be classified as parameter threshold and state threshold, and voltage thresholds which belong to  state threshold are determined by separatrix in state space.
Revised:  In this paper, we propose that threshold phenomena can be classified as parameter thresholds and state thresholds. Voltage thresholds which belong to state threshold are determined by separatrix in state space.
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Original:  In this paper, we propose that threshold phenomena can be classified as parameter threshold and state threshold, and voltage thresholds which belong to  state threshold are determined by separatrix in state space.
Revised:  In this paper, we propose that threshold phenomena can be classified as parameter threshold and state threshold, and voltage thresholds which belong to the state threshold are determined by separatrix in state space.
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Original:  We show that separatrix generally exist in state space of neuron models and the previously assumed threshold evolving equation versus time is naturally deduced from the separatrix.
Revised:  We demonstrate that the separatrix generally exists in the state space of neuron models and the previously assumed threshold evolving equation versus time is naturally deduced from the separatrix.
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Original:  In the view of neuron dynamics, the threshold voltage variation with different stimulus is determined by crossing the separatrix at different points in state space.
Revised:  In terms of neuron dynamics, the threshold voltage variation with different stimulus is determined by crossing the separatrix at different points in state space.
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Original:  In the view of neuron dynamics, the threshold voltage variation with different stimulus is determined by crossing the separatrix at different points in state space.
Revised:  In the view of neuron dynamics, the threshold voltage variation , which is affected by different stimuli, is determined by crossing the separatrix at different points in state space.
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Original:  The proposals are also systematically verified in four example models, three of which have analytic separatrices and the other is the classic Hodgkin-Huxley model.
Revised:  The proposals are also systematically verified in example models, three of which have analytic separatrices and the other is the classic Hodgkin-Huxley model.
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Original:  The proposals are also systematically verified in four example models, three of which have analytic separatrices and the other is the classic Hodgkin-Huxley model.
Revised:  The proposals are also systematically verified in four example models, three of which have analytic separatrices and one is the classic Hodgkin-Huxley model.
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Original:  The sepratrix-crossing framework provides a general thought of the neuronal threshold and will facilitates understanding the nature of threshold variability.
Revised:  The separatrix-crossing framework provides an overview of the neuronal threshold and will facilitates understanding the nature of threshold variability.
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Original:  The sepratrix-crossing framework provides a general thought of the neuronal threshold and will facilitates understanding the nature of threshold variability.
Revised:  The sepratrix-crossing framework provides a general thought of the neuronal threshold and will facilitate understanding of the nature of threshold variability.
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Original: Anonymous messaging platforms , such as Secret, Yik Yak, and Whisper , have emerged as important social media tools for sharing one's thoughts without the fear of being judged by friends, family, or the public.
Revised: Anonymous social media platforms like Secret, Yik Yak, and Whisper , have emerged as important social media tools for sharing one's thoughts without the fear of being judged by friends, family, or the public.
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Original: Anonymous messaging platforms , such as Secret, Yik Yak, and Whisper , have emerged as important social media tools for sharing one's thoughts without the fear of being judged by friends, family, or the public.
Revised: Anonymous messaging platforms , such as Secret, Yik Yak, and Whisper have emerged as important social media tools for sharing one's thoughts without the fear of being judged by friends, family, or the public.
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Original: Anonymous messaging platforms , such as Secret, Yik Yak, and Whisper , have emerged as important social media tools for sharing one's thoughts without the fear of being judged by friends, family, or the public.
Revised: Anonymous messaging platforms , such as Secret, Yik Yak, and Whisper , have emerged as important tools for sharing one's thoughts without the fear of being judged by friends, family, or the public.
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Original: Anonymous messaging platforms , such as Secret, Yik Yak, and Whisper , have emerged as important social media tools for sharing one's thoughts without the fear of being judged by friends, family, or the public.
Revised: Anonymous messaging platforms , such as Secret, Yik Yak, and Whisper , have emerged as important social media tools for sharing ideas without the fear of being judged by friends, family, or the public.
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Original:  Further, anonymous platforms like these are important in nations with authoritarian governments, where the right to free expression and sometimes the personal safety of the author of the message depend on anonymity.
Revised:  Further, anonymous platforms like these are important in nations under authoritarian rule, where freedom of expression and the personal safety of the author of the message depend on anonymity.
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Original:  Further, anonymous platforms like these are important in nations with authoritarian governments, where the right to free expression and sometimes the personal safety of the author of the message depend on anonymity.
Revised:  Further, anonymous platforms like these are important in nations with authoritarian governments, where the right to free expression and sometimes the personal safety of message authors may depend on anonymity.
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Original:  Whether for fear of judgment or personal endangerment , it is sometimes crucial to keep anonymous the identity of the user who initially posted a sensitive message .
Revised:  Whether for fear of judgment or retribution , it is sometimes crucial to keep anonymous the identity of the user who initially posted a sensitive message .
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Original:  Whether for fear of judgment or personal endangerment , it is sometimes crucial to keep anonymous the identity of the user who initially posted a sensitive message .
Revised:  Whether for fear of judgment or personal endangerment , it is sometimes crucial to hide the identities of users who post sensitive messages .
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Original:  it observes either a snapshot of the spread of a message at a certain time or sampled timestamp metadata (or both) .
Revised:  it observes either a snapshot of the spread of a message at a certain time , sampled timestamp metadata (or both) .
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Original:  it observes either a snapshot of the spread of a message at a certain time or sampled timestamp metadata (or both) .
Revised:  it observes either a snapshot of the spread of a message at a certain time or sampled timestamp metadata , or both .
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Original:  We introduce a novel messaging protocol, which we call adaptive diffusion, and show that under the snapshot adversarial model, it spreads the messages fast and achieves a perfect obfuscation of the source when the underlying contact network is an infinite regular tree.
Revised:  We introduce a novel messaging protocol, which we call adaptive diffusion, and show that under the snapshot adversarial model, adaptive diffusion spreads content fast and achieves a perfect obfuscation of the source when the underlying contact network is an infinite regular tree.
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