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Original:  Before practicing, it should be observed minutely regarding the presence of knot or dust particle in it as it can harm the soft nasal region and bleeding can also cause .
Revised:  Before practicing, it should be observed minutely regarding the presence of knot or dust particle in it as it can harm the soft nasal region and also cause bleeding .
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Original:  Mostly you can use cotton thread having 4mm width and  around 36 cm long (long enough to pass down the nose and reach out through the mouth) you can also use a thin rubber catheter .
Revised:  Mostly you can use cotton thread having 4mm width and being around 36 cm long (long enough to pass down the nose and reach out through the mouth) you can also use a thin rubber catheter .
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Original:  Mostly you can use cotton thread having 4mm width and  around 36 cm long (long enough to pass down the nose and reach out through the mouth) you can also use a thin rubber catheter .
Revised:  Mostly you can use cotton thread having 4mm width and around 36 cm long (long enough to pass down the nose and reach out through the mouth) .
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Original:  For beginning users a thin rubber catheter is preferred as it’s more lubricated as compare to a cotton thread, so it easily slides  through nasal passages.
Revised:  For beginning users a thin rubber catheter is preferred as it’s more lubricated compared to a cotton thread, so it easily slides through nasal passages.
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Original:  For beginning users a thin rubber catheter is preferred as it’s more lubricated as compare to a cotton thread, so it easily slides  through nasal passages.
Revised:  For beginning users a thin rubber catheter is preferred as it’s more lubricated as compare to a cotton thread, so it easily slides more through nasal passages.
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Original:  While using cotton thread for Sutra neti, make sure to lubricate it using beeswax (or any other agent) otherwise it can produce a sense of nausea. thread for Sutra Neti?.
Revised:  While using cotton thread for Sutra neti, make sure to lubricate it using beeswax (or any other agent) otherwise it can produce a sense of nausea. 
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Original:  Some children are diagnosed with nasal allergies as early as age 2 and could use nasal rinsing devices at that time (only about Jal Neti Kriya) if a pediatrician recommends it . But very young children might not tolerate the procedure.
Revised:  Some children are diagnosed with nasal allergies as early as age 2 and could use nasal rinsing devices at that time (only about Jal Neti Kriya) if a pediatrician recommends it , however very young children might not tolerate the procedure.
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Original: Neti (Sanskrit: नेती netī) is an important part of Hindu Shatkarma (sometimes known as Shatkriya), the yogic system of body cleansing techniques  .
Revised: Neti (Sanskrit: नेती netī) is an important part of Shatkarma (sometimes known as Shatkriya), the yogic system of body cleansing techniques .
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Original: Neti (Sanskrit: नेती netī) is an important part of Hindu Shatkarma (sometimes known as Shatkriya), the yogic system of body cleansing techniques  .
Revised: Neti (Sanskrit: नेती netī) is an important part of Hindu Shatkarma (sometimes known as Shatkriya), the yogic system of body cleansing techniques . It can have universal application, irrespective of their religion .
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Original:  Manufacturing parameters greatly influence the micro-structure of the product, where e.g. a fast cooling rate in combination with low degree of melting in SLM leads to the predominant formation of martensitic alpha-prime-phase , giving a very hard product.
Revised:  Manufacturing parameters greatly influence the microstructure of the product, where e.g. a fast cooling rate in combination with low degree of melting in SLM leads to the predominant formation of martensitic alpha-prime-phase , giving a very hard product.
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Original:  Manufacturing parameters greatly influence the micro-structure of the product, where e.g. a fast cooling rate in combination with low degree of melting in SLM leads to the predominant formation of martensitic alpha-prime-phase , giving a very hard product.
Revised:  Manufacturing parameters greatly influence the micro-structure of the product, where e.g. a fast cooling rate in combination with low degree of melting in SLM leads to the predominant formation of martensitic alpha-prime phase , giving a very hard product.
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Original:  “To Perceive the Mix of GTA Parameters on the Outside of AISI304 Stainless Steel that Gives Improvement in the Properties AISI304 Tempered Steel in the Changed Layer”, United International Journal for Research Technology 1.1 (2019): 10-26.
Revised:  “To Perceive the Mix of GTA Parameters on the Outside of AISI304 Stainless Steel that Gives Improvement in the Properties AISI304 Tempered Steel in the Changed Layer”, United International Journal for Research 
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Original:  See Titanium#Orthopedic implants.
Revised:  See : Titanium orthopedic implants.
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Original: People from Taraz Category:FC Kairat players Category:FC Shakhter Karagandy players Category:FC Taraz players Category:Pakhtakor Tashkent FK players Category:FC Caspiy players Category:Expatriate football managers in Russia Category:Kazakhstani football managers Category:FC Ural Yekaterinburg managers Category:FC Tobol managers Category:FC Kyzylzhar managers Category:FC Irtysh  managers Category:FC Neftekhimik Nizhnekamsk managers Category:FC Kairat managers Category:FC Taraz manage
Revised: People from Taraz Category:FC Kairat players Category:FC Shakhter Karagandy players Category:FC Taraz players Category:Pakhtakor Tashkent FK players Category:FC Caspiy players Category:Expatriate football managers in Russia Category:Kazakhstani football managers Category:FC Ural Yekaterinburg managers Category:FC Tobol managers Category:FC Kyzylzhar managers Category:FC Irtysh Pavlodar managers Category:FC Neftekhimik Nizhnekamsk managers Category:FC Kairat managers Category:FC Taraz manage
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Original: People from Taraz Category:FC Kairat players Category:FC Shakhter Karagandy players Category:FC Taraz players Category:Pakhtakor Tashkent FK players Category:FC Caspiy players Category:Expatriate football managers in Russia Category:Kazakhstani football managers Category:FC Ural Yekaterinburg managers Category:FC Tobol managers Category:FC Kyzylzhar managers Category:FC Irtysh Pavlodar managers Category:FC Neftekhimik Nizhnekamsk managers Category:FC Kairat managers Category:FC Taraz manage 
Revised: People from Taraz Category:FC Kairat players Category:FC Shakhter Karagandy players Category:FC Taraz players Category:Pakhtakor Tashkent FK players Category:FC Caspiy players Category:Expatriate football managers in Russia Category:Kazakhstani football managers Category:FC Ural Yekaterinburg managers Category:FC Tobol managers Category:FC Kyzylzhar managers Category:FC Irtysh Pavlodar managers Category:FC Neftekhimik Nizhnekamsk managers Category:FC Kairat managers Category:FC Taraz managers 
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Original: People from Taraz Category:FC Kairat players Category:FC Shakhter Karagandy players Category:FC Taraz players Category:Pakhtakor Tashkent FK players Category:FC Caspiy players Category:Expatriate football managers in Russia Category:Kazakhstani football managers Category:FC Ural Yekaterinburg managers Category:FC Tobol managers Category:FC Kyzylzhar managers Category:FC Irtysh Pavlodar managers Category:FC Neftekhimik Nizhnekamsk managers Category:FC Kairat managers Category:FC Taraz manage 
Revised: People from Taraz Category:FC Kairat players Category:FC Shakhter Karagandy players Category:FC Taraz players Category:Pakhtakor Tashkent FK players Category:FC Caspiy players Category:Expatriate football managers in Russia Category:Kazakhstani football managers Category:FC Ural Yekaterinburg managers Category:FC Tobol managers Category:FC Kyzylzhar managers Category:FC Irtysh Pavlodar managers Category:FC Neftekhimik Nizhnekamsk managers Category:FC Kairat managers Category:FC Taraz manage Category:Association footballers not categorized by positi
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Original: FC Taraz players Category:Pakhtakor Tashkent FK players Category:FC Caspiy players Category:Expatriate football managers in Russia Category:Kazakhstani football managers Category:FC Ural Yekaterinburg managers Category:FC Tobol managers Category:FC Kyzylzhar managers Category:FC Irtysh Pavlodar managers Category:FC Neftekhimik Nizhnekamsk managers Category:FC Kairat managers Category:FC Taraz managers Category:Association footballers not categorized by positi
Revised: FC Taraz players Category:Pakhtakor Tashkent FK players Category:FC Caspiy players Category:Expatriate football managers in Russia Category:Kazakhstani football managers Category:FC Ural Yekaterinburg managers Category:FC Tobol managers Category:FC Kyzylzhar managers Category:FC Irtysh Pavlodar managers Category:FC Neftekhimik Nizhnekamsk managers Category:FC Kairat managers Category:FC Taraz managers Category:Association football defende
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Original:  Life Sardarsinh Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Rawabhai II and Fulajiba..
Revised:  Life Sardarsinh Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
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Original: Life Sardarsinh Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
Revised: Life Sardarsinhji Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
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Original:  He died on 25 May 1957 at  Circuit House of Veraval (now in Gujarat).
Revised:  He died on 25 May 1957 at the Circuit House of Veraval (now in Gujarat).
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Original:  Legacy and recognition He was awarded the Chevalier by  French Government in 1951.
Revised:  Legacy and recognition He was awarded the Chevalier by the French Government in 1951.
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Original:  His portraits are placed in  Gujarat Legislative Assembly and his place of death in Veraval.
Revised:  His portraits are placed in the Gujarat Legislative Assembly and his place of death in Veraval.
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Original:  His great grandson Rajendrasinh Rana served as a Member of Parliament from 1996 to 2014 representing Bhavnagar.
Revised:  His great grandson Rajendrasinh Rana served as the Member of Parliament from 1996 to 2014 representing Bhavnagar.
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Original: Sardarsinhji Ravaji Rana (1870–1957), often abbreviated S. R. Rana, was an Indian political activist, founding member of the Paris Indian Society and the vice-president of the Indian Home Rule Society..
Revised: Sardar Sinhji Ravaji Rana (1870–1957), often abbreviated S. R. Rana, was an Indian political activist, founding member of the Paris Indian Society and the vice-president of the Indian Home Rule Society..
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Original:  Life Sardarsinhji Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
Revised:  Life Sardar Sinhji Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
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Original: Sardar Sinhji Ravaji Rana (1870–1957), often abbreviated S. R. Rana, was an Indian political activist, founding member of the Paris Indian Society and the vice-president of the Indian Home Rule Society..
Revised: Sardarsinhji Ravaji Rana (1870–1957), often abbreviated S. R. Rana, was an Indian political activist, founding member of the Paris Indian Society and the vice-president of the Indian Home Rule Society..
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Original:  Life Sardar Sinhji Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
Revised:  Life Sardarsinhji Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
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Original:  Life Sardarsinhji Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
Revised:  Life Sardar Sinhji Ravaji Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
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Original:  Life Sardar Sinhji Ravaji Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
Revised:  Life Sardarsinhji Rana was born on 10 April 1870 (Chaitra Sud 9 according to Hindu calendar) in Kanthariya village in Kathiawar to a Rajput family of Ravaji II and Fulajiba..
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He gifted around 1 Lakh books from his Library to 'Sorbonne University', Paris and ‘Shantiniketan’ in India.
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Original: Stéphan Barron was the first to developp the concept of Technoromanticism between 1991 and 1996 for his doctoral thesis at the University Paris VIIIThe term "Technoromantisme" is quoted several times in Barron's doctaral thesis "Art planétaire et Romantisme Techno-écologique", Université Paris VIII, 1997.
Revised: Stéphan Barron was the first to develop the concept of Technoromanticism between 1991 and 1996 for his doctoral thesis at the University Paris VIIIThe term "Technoromantisme" is quoted several times in Barron's doctaral thesis "Art planétaire et Romantisme Techno-écologique", Université Paris VIII, 1997.
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Original: The term "Technoromantisme" is quoted several times in Barron's doctaral thesis "Art planétaire et Romantisme Techno-écologique", Université Paris VIII, 1997  The main theme of his research is what he calls “Technoromantisme/Technoromanticism”, a neologism which he created and which has been adopted by other English-speaking researchers.
Revised: The term "Technoromantisme" is quoted several times in Barron's doctaral thesis "Art planétaire et Romantisme Techno-écologique", Université Paris VIII, 1997 URL The main theme of his research is what he calls “Technoromantisme/Technoromanticism”, a neologism which he created and which has been adopted by other English-speaking researchers.
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Original:  Technoromantism is the theory of links between art and new technologies, within the context of the threats posed to nature by technoscience and economic development.
Revised:  Technoromanticism is the theory of links between art and new technologies, within the context of the threats posed to nature by technoscience and economic development.
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Original:  Another early reference, again not specifying the hand, was by Isidore of Seville in his 7th century work De ecclesiasticis officiis XX, 8, which refers to the Roman story of a vein connected to the brain .
Revised:  Another early reference, again not specifying the hand, was by Isidore of Seville in his 7th century work De ecclesiasticis officiis XX, 8, which refers to the Roman story of a vein connected to the heart .
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Original:  This traditional belief is factually inaccurate as all the fingers in the hand have a similar vein structure.
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Original:  This theory has been cited in western cultures as one of the reasons the engagement ring and/or wedding ring was placed on the fourth finger, or "ring finger".
Revised:  This theory has been cited in Western cultures as one of the reasons the engagement ring and/or wedding ring was placed on the fourth finger, or "ring finger".
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Original:  property relations: Neumann’s law, melting point, mechanical properties (hardness, slip, cleavage, elastic moduli), wetting, thermal properties (thermal expansion, specific heat, thermal conductivity), diffusion, ionic conductivity, refractive index, absorption, color, Dielectrics and Ferroelectrics, and Magnetism Crystal structures of representative metals, semiconductors, polymers, and ceramics Fuck my life Category:Chemistry Category:Crystallograp
Revised:  property relations: Neumann’s law, melting point, mechanical properties (hardness, slip, cleavage, elastic moduli), wetting, thermal properties (thermal expansion, specific heat, thermal conductivity), diffusion, ionic conductivity, refractive index, absorption, color, Dielectrics and Ferroelectrics, and Magnetism Crystal structures of representative metals, semiconductors, polymers, and ceramics Category:Chemistry Category:Crystallograp
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Original: Crystal chemistry is the study of the principles of chemistry behind crystals and their use in describing structure-property relations in solids.
Revised:  is the study of the principles of chemistry behind crystals and their use in describing structure-property relations in solids.
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Original:  is the study of the principles of chemistry behind crystals and their use in describing structure-property relations in solids.
Revised: Crystal chemistry is the study of the principles of chemistry behind crystals and their use in describing structure-property relations in solids.
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Original:  identifying important raw materials and minerals as well as their names and chemical formulae. describing the crystal structure of important materials and determining their atomic models. learning the systematics of crystal and glass chemistry. understanding how physical and chemical properties are related to crystal structure and microstructure. studying the engineering significance of these ideas and how they relate to industrial products: past, present, and future.
Revised:  identifying important raw materials and minerals as well as their names and chemical formulae. describing the crystal structure of important materials and determining their atomic models. learning the systematics of crystal and glass chemistry. understanding how physical and chemical properties are related to crystal structure and microstructure. studying the engineering significance of these ideas and how they relate to foreign products: past, present, and future.
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Original:  identifying important raw materials and minerals as well as their names and chemical formulae. describing the crystal structure of important materials and determining their atomic models. learning the systematics of crystal and glass chemistry. understanding how physical and chemical properties are related to crystal structure and microstructure. studying the engineering significance of these ideas and how they relate to foreign products: past, present, and future.
Revised:  identifying important raw materials and minerals as well as their names and chemical formulae. describing the crystal structure of important materials and determining their atomic details learning the systematics of crystal and glass chemistry. understanding how physical and chemical properties are related to crystal structure and microstructure. studying the engineering significance of these ideas and how they relate to foreign products: past, present, and future.
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Original: See also: 1610s in South Africa, other events of the 1620s, 1630s in South Africa and the Timeline of South African history.
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Original:  Events 1622 - The Portuguese ship, Sao João Baptista, was lost off the eastern coast of South Africa References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Category:Decades in South Africa South Africa Category:17th century in South Africa South Afri
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Original:  Events 1622 - The Portuguese ship, Sao João Baptista, was lost off the eastern coast of South Africa References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Category:Decades in South Africa South Africa Category:17th century in South Africa South Afri
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Original: See also: 1600s in South Africa, other events of the 1610s, 1620s in South Africa and the Timeline of South African history.
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Original:  Events References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Category:Decades in South Africa South Africa Category:17th century in South Africa South Afri
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Original:  Events References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Category:Decades in South Africa South Africa Category:17th century in South Africa South Afri
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Original: World championships and world cups  Sport Body Year Event type Location NationsAquathlon CMAS 2009 World Cup Not known Not knownFinswimming CMAS 1976 World Championship Hanover,
Revised: World championships and world cups + Sport Body Year Event type Location NationsAquathlon CMAS 2009 World Cup Not known Not knownFinswimming CMAS 1976 World Championship Hanover,
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Original: World championships and world cups  Sport Body Year Event type Location NationsAquathlon CMAS 2009 World Cup Not known Not knownFinswimming CMAS 1976 World Championship Hanover,
Revised: World championships and world cups Sport Body Year Event type Location Nations Aquathlon CMAS 2009 World Cup Not known Not knownFinswimming CMAS 1976 World Championship Hanover,
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Original: World championships and world cups  Sport Body Year Event type Location NationsAquathlon CMAS 2009 World Cup Not known Not knownFinswimming CMAS 1976 World Championship Hanover,
Revised: World championships and world cups Sport Body Year Event type Location NationsAquathlon CMAS 2009 World Cup Not known Not known Finswimming CMAS 1976 World Championship Hanover,
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Original:  Germany Not knownFreediving AIDA 1996 World Championship Nice,
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Original: See also: 1630s in South Africa, other events of the 1640s, 1650s in South Africa and the Timeline of South African history.
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Original:  Events 1643 - The Portuguese ship, Santa Maria Madre de Deus is wrecked off the South African east coast 25 March 1647 - The Dutch ship, Nieuwe Haerlem is wrecked in Table Bay and survivors later build a small fort References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Category:Decades in South Africa South Africa Category:17th century in South Africa South Afri
Revised:  Events 1643 - The Portuguese ship, Santa Maria Madre de Deus is wrecked off the South African east coast 25 March 1647 - The Dutch ship, Nieuwe Haerlem is wrecked in Table Bay and survivors later build a small fort References See Timeline of South African history for list of Category:Decades in South Africa South Africa Category:17th century in South Africa South Afri
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