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Original:  In such cases  ICCAs are vulnerable through land and water being appropriated or “reallocated” to a variety of alternative uses .
Revised:  In such cases ICCAs are vulnerable through land and water being appropriated or “reallocated” for an alternative use .
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Original:  Within indigenous peoples and local communities, ICCAs may also suffer as a result of changing value systems, increased pressure on natural resources and other internal tensions .
Revised:  ICCAs may also suffer as a result of changing value systems, increased pressure on natural resources and other internal tensions .
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Original:  Within indigenous peoples and local communities, ICCAs may also suffer as a result of changing value systems, increased pressure on natural resources and other internal tensions .
Revised:  Within indigenous peoples and local communities, ICCAs may also suffer as a result of changing value systems, increased pressure on natural resources and other internal tensions 
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Original:  In general, ICCas are exposed to both external and internal threats.
Revised:  In general, ICCAs are exposed to both external and internal threats.
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Original:  A few examples are reported below . external threats imposed development and resource exploitation processes,
Revised:  A few examples are reported below . External Imposed development and resource exploitation processes,
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Original:  including mining and fossil fuel extraction (particularly important as , even when indigenous peoples and local communities possess land rights, government usually reserve for themselves the use of sub-soil resources), logging, tree plantation, industrial fishing, sea dredging,  conversion to large-scale grazing or agriculture (including agrofuel plantations), water diversions and drainage works, urbanisation and major infrastructure (roads, ports, airports, tourism);
Revised:  such as mining and fossil fuel extraction (particularly important as , even when indigenous peoples and local communities possess land rights, government usually reserve for themselves the use of sub-soil resources), logging, tree plantation, industrial fishing, sea dredging, conversion to large-scale grazing or agriculture (including agrofuel plantations), water diversions and drainage works, urbanisation and major infrastructure (roads, ports, airports, tourism);
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Original:  including mining and fossil fuel extraction (particularly important as , even when indigenous peoples and local communities possess land rights, government usually reserve for themselves the use of sub-soil resources), logging, tree plantation, industrial fishing, sea dredging,  conversion to large-scale grazing or agriculture (including agrofuel plantations), water diversions and drainage works, urbanisation and major infrastructure (roads, ports, airports, tourism);
Revised:  including mining and fossil fuel extraction (particularly important as even if indigenous peoples and local communities possess land rights, government usually reserve for themselves the use of sub-soil resources), logging, tree plantation, industrial fishing, sea dredging, conversion to large-scale grazing or agriculture (including agrofuel plantations), water diversions and drainage works, urbanisation and major infrastructure (roads, ports, airports, tourism);
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Original:  including mining and fossil fuel extraction (particularly important as , even when indigenous peoples and local communities possess land rights, government usually reserve for themselves the use of sub-soil resources), logging, tree plantation, industrial fishing, sea dredging,  conversion to large-scale grazing or agriculture (including agrofuel plantations), water diversions and drainage works, urbanisation and major infrastructure (roads, ports, airports, tourism);
Revised:  including mining and fossil fuel extraction (particularly important as , even when indigenous peoples and local communities possess land rights, government usually reserve for themselves the use of sub-soil resources), logging, tree plantation, industrial fishing, sea dredging, land conversion to large-scale grazing or agriculture (including agrofuel plantations), water diversions and drainage works, urbanisation and major infrastructure (roads, ports, airports, tourism);
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Original:  expropriation of community land ( through nationalisation, privatisation, and conservation initiatives, in particular for the creation of state-governed protected areas );
Revised:  Expropriation of community land ( through nationalisation, privatisation, and conservation initiatives, in particular for the creation of state-governed protected areas );
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Original:  expropriation of community land ( through nationalisation, privatisation, and conservation initiatives, in particular for the creation of state-governed protected areas );
Revised:  expropriation of community land through nationalisation, privatisation, and conservation initiatives, in particular for the creation of state-governed protected areas );
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Original:  expropriation of community land ( through nationalisation, privatisation, and conservation initiatives, in particular for the creation of state-governed protected areas );
Revised:  expropriation of community land ( through nationalisation, privatisation, and conservation initiatives, particularly the creation of state-governed protected areas );
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Original:  war , violent conflicts and movements of refugees;
Revised:  war , violent conflicts or movements of refugees;
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Original:  territorial encroachment by or conflicts with other communities and municipalities;
Revised:  Territorial encroachment by or conflicts with other communities and municipalities;
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Original:  inappropriate forms of recognition (in particular recognition that imposes top-down institutional arrangements and thereby devalues and de-motivates traditional governance institutions );
Revised:  Inappropriate forms of recognition (in particular recognition that imposes top-down institutional arrangements and thereby devalues and de-motivates traditional governance institutions );
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Original:  inappropriate forms of recognition (in particular recognition that imposes top-down institutional arrangements and thereby devalues and de-motivates traditional governance institutions );
Revised:  inappropriate forms of recognition , such as that which imposes top-down institutional arrangements and thereby devalues and de-motivates traditional governance institutions );
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Original:  active acculturation of communities (e.g. through education programmes disrespectful of local cultures, livelihoods and values, or evangelisation programmes of different faiths );
Revised:  Active acculturation of communities (e.g. through education programmes disrespectful of local cultures, livelihoods and values, or evangelisation programmes of different faiths );
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Original:  active acculturation of communities (e.g. through education programmes disrespectful of local cultures, livelihoods and values, or evangelisation programmes of different faiths );
Revised:  active acculturation of communities i.e. education programmes disrespectful of local cultures, livelihoods and values, or evangelisation programmes of different faiths );
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Original:  poaching, and unauthorised extraction of timber and plant resources;
Revised:  Poaching and unauthorised extraction of timber and plant resources;
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Original:  air and water pollution through discharge of waste residuals (e.g. via acid rain, chemical pollution from upstream mining or run-off of chemical inputs from agriculture) and the spread of invasive / exotic species;
Revised:  Air and water pollution through discharge of waste residuals (e.g. via acid rain, chemical pollution from upstream mining or run-off of chemical inputs from agriculture) and the spread of invasive / exotic species;
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Original:  air and water pollution through discharge of waste residuals (e.g. via acid rain, chemical pollution from upstream mining or run-off of chemical inputs from agriculture) and the spread of invasive / exotic species;
Revised:  air and water pollution through discharge of waste residuals (e.g. via acid rain, chemical pollution from upstream mining or run-off of chemical inputs from agriculture) and the spread of invasive or exotic species;
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Original:  extreme natural events and catastrophes, including droughts, floods, forest fires, hurricanes, earthquakes and tsunamis, some of which are related to human transformation of the landscape, waterways and climate. internal threats changing values, acculturation and integration into dominant society, leading to commoditisation of nature and culture and, ultimately, the loss of traditional knowledge, locally adapted management practices and governance institutions —
Revised:  Extreme natural events and catastrophes, including droughts, floods, forest fires, hurricanes, earthquakes and tsunamis, some of which are related to human transformation of the landscape, waterways and climate. internal threats changing values, acculturation and integration into dominant society, leading to commoditisation of nature and culture and, ultimately, the loss of traditional knowledge, locally adapted management practices and governance institutions —
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Original:  extreme natural events and catastrophes, including droughts, floods, forest fires, hurricanes, earthquakes and tsunamis, some of which are related to human transformation of the landscape, waterways and climate. internal threats changing values, acculturation and integration into dominant society, leading to commoditisation of nature and culture and, ultimately, the loss of traditional knowledge, locally adapted management practices and governance institutions —
Revised:  extreme natural events and catastrophes, including droughts, floods, forest fires, hurricanes, earthquakes and tsunamis, some of which are related to human transformation of the landscape, waterways and climate. Internal Changing values, acculturation and integration into dominant society, leading to commoditisation of nature and culture and, ultimately, the loss of traditional knowledge, locally adapted management practices and governance institutions —
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Original:  increasing pressure on resources — in particular related to the substitution of local subsistence and solidarity economies with the market economy;
Revised:  Increasing pressure on resources — in particular related to the substitution of local subsistence and solidarity economies with the market economy;
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Original:  increasing pressure on resources — in particular related to the substitution of local subsistence and solidarity economies with the market economy;
Revised:  increasing pressure on resources — in particular those that lead to the substitution of local subsistence and solidarity economies with the market economy;
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Original:  persistent or new inequalities between economic and social classes and gender groups within the community, leading to conflicts about management of natural resources and elite capture of conservation benefits;
Revised:  Persistent or new inequalities between economic and social classes and gender groups within the community, leading to conflicts about management of natural resources and elite capture of conservation benefits;
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Original:  depopulation through migration because of new economic opportunities, social conflicts and political pressures;
Revised:  Depopulation through migration because of new economic opportunities, social conflicts and political pressures;
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Original:  progressive loss of food sovereignty and traditional medical systems, weakening traditional communities because of poorer health and nutrition.
Revised:  Progressive loss of food sovereignty and traditional medical systems, weakening traditional communities because of poorer health and nutrition.
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Original:  In real life, threats can hardly ever be neatly separated between “external” and “internal”  , as community members may be active participants in external processes, and exogenous forces may drive internal processes.
Revised:  In practice, threats cannot necessarily be segregated into “external” and “internal” , as community members may be active participants in external processes, and exogenous forces may drive internal processes.
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Original:  In real life, threats can hardly ever be neatly separated between “external” and “internal”  , as community members may be active participants in external processes, and exogenous forces may drive internal processes.
Revised:  In real life, threats can hardly ever be neatly separated between “external” and “internal” categories , as community members may be active participants in external processes, and exogenous forces may drive internal processes.
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Original:  These may bring in welcome cash for a variety of development needs but can also be a door for corruption and mis-governance, ushering divisions, conflicts and social disruption.
Revised:  These may bring in welcome funds for a variety of development needs but can also be a door for corruption and mis-governance, ushering divisions, conflicts and social disruption.
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Original:  In some countries they are even denied legal existence as “peoples” and “communities”, and denied the chance of owning or possessing use rights for land and natural resources collectively, one of the last barriers to individual weakness and greed.
Revised:  In some countries they are even denied legal existence as “peoples” and “communities”, and denied the chance of owning or possessing land rights and natural resources collectively, one of the last barriers to individual weakness and greed.
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Original:  Hopefully , the recognition of the many values of ICCAs will help in the broader struggles for human rights and indigenous peoples’ rights, and contribute to foster more equitable and sustainable societies.
Revised:  In theory , the recognition of the many values of ICCAs will help in the broader struggles for human rights and indigenous peoples’ rights, and contribute to foster more equitable and sustainable societies.
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Original:  International Policy on ICCAs While the “legitimacy” of ICCAs is rooted in the values and meanings they possess for the most directly concerned peoples and communities, their “legality” and their broad recognition and support by the society at large are rooted in a process that takes strength from international conventions and agreements.
Revised:  International Policy on ICCAs While the “legitimacy” of ICCAs is rooted in the values and meanings they possess for the most directly concerned peoples and communities, their “legality” and their broad recognition and support by society at large are rooted in a process that takes strength from international conventions and agreements.
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Original:  Numerous IUCN Resolutions attest to the will of IUCN members to recognize and support ICCAs (see IUCN ResolutionsURL and URL approved at the Barcelona World Conservation Congress of 2008 ) , and IUCN publications were developed to back this up technically (Dudley, 2008).
Revised:  Numerous IUCN Resolutions attest to the will of IUCN members to recognize and support ICCAs (see IUCN ResolutionsURL and URL approved at the Barcelona World Conservation Congress of 2008 , and IUCN publications were developed to back this up technically (Dudley, 2008).
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Original:  including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems. %DIFDELCMD < [%%% The IUCN protected area matrix, in fact, lists ICCAs as column 4 and notes that ICCAs can embrace all IUCN categories/ management objectives . Meanwhile, CBD COP 8 and CBD COP 9 reviewed the implementation of PoWPA and stressed the need to engage more forcefully in its element 2 dedicated to “Governance, participation, equity and benefit sharing”.
Revised:  including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems. %DIFDELCMD < [%%% . Meanwhile, CBD COP 8 and CBD COP 9 reviewed the implementation of PoWPA and stressed the need to engage more forcefully in its element 2 dedicated to “Governance, participation, equity and benefit sharing”.
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Original:  including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems. %DIFDELCMD < [%%% The IUCN protected area matrix, in fact, lists ICCAs as column 4 and notes that ICCAs can embrace all IUCN categories/ management objectives . Meanwhile, CBD COP 8 and CBD COP 9 reviewed the implementation of PoWPA and stressed the need to engage more forcefully in its element 2 dedicated to “Governance, participation, equity and benefit sharing”.
Revised:  including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems. %DIFDELCMD < [%%% The IUCN protected area matrix, in fact, lists ICCAs as column 4 and notes that ICCAs can embrace all IUCN categories/ management objectives Meanwhile, CBD COP 8 and CBD COP 9 reviewed the implementation of PoWPA and stressed the need to engage more forcefully in its element 2 dedicated to “Governance, participation, equity and benefit sharing”.
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Original:  including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems. %DIFDELCMD < [%%% The IUCN protected area matrix, in fact, lists ICCAs as column 4 and notes that ICCAs can embrace all IUCN categories/ management objectives . Meanwhile, CBD COP 8 and CBD COP 9 reviewed the implementation of PoWPA and stressed the need to engage more forcefully in its element 2 dedicated to “Governance, participation, equity and benefit sharing”.
Revised:  including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems. %DIFDELCMD < [%%% The IUCN protected area matrix, in fact, lists ICCAs as column 4 and notes that ICCAs can embrace all IUCN categories/ management objectives . CBD COP 8 and CBD COP 9 reviewed the implementation of PoWPA and stressed the need to engage more forcefully in its element 2 dedicated to “Governance, participation, equity and benefit sharing”.
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Original:  including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems. %DIFDELCMD < [%%% The IUCN protected area matrix, in fact, lists ICCAs as column 4 and notes that ICCAs can embrace all IUCN categories/ management objectives . Meanwhile, CBD COP 8 and CBD COP 9 reviewed the implementation of PoWPA and stressed the need to engage more forcefully in its element 2 dedicated to “Governance, participation, equity and benefit sharing”.
Revised:  including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems. %DIFDELCMD < [%%% The IUCN protected area matrix, in fact, lists ICCAs as column 4 and notes that ICCAs can embrace all IUCN categories/ management objectives . Meanwhile, CBD COP 8 and CBD COP 9 reviewed the implementation of PoWPA and stressed the need to engage more forcefully in the element dedicated to 'Governance, Participation, Equity and Benefit Sharing'.Convention on Biological Diversity, Element 2: Governance, Participation, Equity and Benefit Sharing
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Original:   While COP 10 embraced text on ICCAs, noting that national legislation should explicitly foresee them (and that legislation that does not foresee them should be improved to do so) , it failed to mention the needed safeguards regarding due respect for customary governance systems .  References Category:Indigenous rights organizations %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%%  Category:Articles created via the Article Wiza
Revised:  At CBD COP 10 embraced text on ICCAs, noting that national legislation should explicitly foresee them (and that legislation that does not foresee them should be improved to do so) , it failed to mention the needed safeguards regarding due respect for customary governance systems . References Category:Indigenous rights organizations %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Articles created via the Article Wiza
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Original:  In ICCAs, the continuation, revival or modification of traditional practices (some of which are of ancient origin) and/or newucceed in protecting and restoring natural resources and cultural values in the face of new threats or opportunities.
Revised:  In ICCAs, the continuation, revival or modification of traditional practices (some of which are of ancient origin) and/or new initiatives succeed in protecting and restoring natural resources and cultural values in the face of new threats or opportunities.
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Original:  Some ICCAs are situated in remote ecosystems that have had minimum human influence, while others encompass areas of various regulations and magnitudes within regions strongly affected  modified by human occupation.
Revised:  Some ICCAs are situated in remote ecosystems that have had minimum human influence, while others encompass areas of various regulations and magnitudes within regions strongly affected or modified by human occupation.
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Original:  " natural and/or modified ecosystems containing significant biodiversity values and ecological services, voluntarily conserved by (sedentary and mobile) indigenous and local communities, through customary laws or other effective means " . An essential publication on ICCAs:
Revised:  " natural and/or modified ecosystems containing significant biodiversity values and ecological services, voluntarily conserved by (sedentary and mobile) indigenous and local communities, through customary laws or other effective means . An essential publication on ICCAs:
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Original:  This relationship is often embedded in the people ’ s or community ’ s sense of identity and/or dependence for livelihood and well being.
Revised:  This relationship is often embedded in the people ' s or community ’ s sense of identity and/or dependence for livelihood and well being.
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Original:  This relationship is often embedded in the people ’ s or community ’ s sense of identity and/or dependence for livelihood and well being.
Revised:  This relationship is often embedded in the people ’ s or community ' s sense of identity and/or dependence for livelihood and well being.
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Original: Numerous IUCN Resolutions attest to the will of IUCN members to recognize and support ICCAsIUCN Policy Resolutions: 4.049 Supporting Indigenous Conservation Territories and other Indigenous Peoples' and Community Conserved Areas were approved at the Barcelona World Conservation Congress of 2008, and IUCN publications were developed to back this up technically.
Revised: Numerous IUCN Resolutions attest to the will of IUCN members to recognize and support ICCAs were approved at the Barcelona World Conservation Congress of 2008, and IUCN publications were developed to back this up technically.
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Original:  IUCN Policy Resolutions: 4.050 Recognition of Indigenous Conservation Territories WCC4 in Barcelona also approved new IUCN technical guidelines for protected areas, explicitly stating that different governance types – including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems.
Revised:  WCC4 in Barcelona also approved new IUCN technical guidelines for protected areas, explicitly stating that different governance types – including ICCAs – can fully contribute to developing national protected area systems.
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Original:  The first contemporary Polish work classified as liberature was a trilogy entitled Oka-leczenie penned by Zenon Fajfer in co-operation with Katarzyna Bazarnik.
Revised:  first contemporary Polish work classified as liberature was a trilogy entitled Oka-leczenie penned by Zenon Fajfer in co-operation with Katarzyna Bazarnik.
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