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Original:  Alaska has the highest average at $3.077 a gallon, and Missouri has the cheapest statewide average at $1.690 . Category:United States Category:Economy and busine
Revised:  Alaska has the highest average at $3.077 a gallon, and Missouri has the cheapest statewide average at $1.690 Category:United States Category:Economy and busine
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Original:  Alaska has the highest average at $3.077 a gallon, and Missouri has the cheapest statewide average at $1.690 . Category:United States Category:Economy and busine
Revised:  Alaska has the highest average at $3.077 a gallon, and Missouri has the cheapest statewide average at $1.690 . 
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Original: For the first time in nearly four years, the national average for a gallon of gas in the United States has fallen below $2.
Revised: For the first time in nearly four years, the national average for a gallon of gasoline in the United States has fallen below $2.
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Original:  Alaska has the highest average at $3.077 a gallon, and Missouri has the cheapest statewide average at $1.690 as well as Ohio at $1.49 in most areas
Revised:  Alaska has the highest average at $3.077 a gallon, and Missouri has the cheapest statewide average at $1.690 
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Original: The audience of the event was primarily notable contributers and partners to the video sharing site.
Revised: The audience of the event was primarily notable contributors and partners to the video sharing site.
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Original: The logo of YouTube live The online video sharing site YouTube has today hosted the first official "YouTube Live" event, which featured many popular musicians and contributers to the site.
Revised: The logo of YouTube live The online video sharing site YouTube has today hosted the first official "YouTube Live" event, which featured many popular musicians and contributors to the site.
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Original:  "YouTube Live is the first time a broad variety of YouTube stars are scheduled to appear together under one roof, ” stated Chris Di Cesare, who works for YouTube as the Head of Marketing.
Revised:  "YouTube Live is the first time a broad variety of YouTube stars are scheduled to appear together under one roof, " stated Chris Di Cesare, who works for YouTube as the Head of Marketing.
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Original:  “ There have been so many wonderful talents that have emerged from YouTube and more established acts continue to recognize how invaluable YouTube is to building their audience.
Revised:  " There have been so many wonderful talents that have emerged from YouTube and more established acts continue to recognize how invaluable YouTube is to building their audience.
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Original:  We felt it was only right to recognize them all in true YouTube fashion. ”
Revised:  We felt it was only right to recognize them all in true YouTube fashion. "
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Original:  The song was based on Barack Obama's concession speech after losing the New hampshire New Hampshire Democratic Primary to Hilary Clinton.
Revised:  The song was based on Barack Obama's concession speech after losing the New Hampshire Democratic Primary to Hilary Clinton.
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Original:  Shipping companies have rerouted around the area  
Revised:  Shipping companies have rerouted around the area . 
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Original:  The Favina remains held with a cargo of military hardware including tanks
Revised:  The Faina remains held with a cargo of military hardware including tanks
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Original:  "I've heard three and four ( people are missing ) but I don't know if that's right."
Revised:  "I've heard three and four people are missing ) but I don't know if that's right."
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Original:  "I've heard three and four ( people are missing ) but I don't know if that's right."
Revised:  "I've heard three and four ( people are missing but I don't know if that's right."
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Original:  Protest leaders insist their planned siege of the parliament is intended to prevend discussion of legislation to amend the constitution.
Revised:  Protest leaders insist their planned siege of the parliament is intended to prevent discussion of legislation to amend the constitution.
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Original:  The Prime Minister has denied any plans to review this draft legislation, stating that the agenda is predominantly ASEAN related .
Revised:  The Prime Minister has denied any plans to review this draft legislation, stating that the agenda is predominantly related to the Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) .
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Original: An Arkansas judge has told  parents of two teenage girls taken from a religious compound run by Tony Alamo that the children can be returned to their parents if the parents agree to leave the compound and secure financial independence away from the controversial "Tony Alamo Christian Ministries" organization.
Revised: An Arkansas judge has told the parents of two teenage girls taken from a religious compound run by Tony Alamo that the children can be returned to their parents if the parents agree to leave the compound and secure financial independence away from the controversial "Tony Alamo Christian Ministries" organization.
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Original:  Authorities raided the compound while investigating allegations of physical abuse and child sexual abuse.
Revised:  Authorities raided the compound while investigating allegations of physical and child sexual abuse.
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Original:  The report expects this to account for 60 ,000 job losses in Scotland, with the worst level of unemployment since the 1990s - a jump of 50 ,000 to 124,00 out of work, or 4.4\%    
Revised:  The report expects this to account for 50 ,000 job losses in Scotland, with the worst level of unemployment since the 1990s - a jump of 50 ,000 to 124,00 out of work, or 4.4\% 
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Original:  The report expects this to account for 60 ,000 job losses in Scotland, with the worst level of unemployment since the 1990s - a jump of 50 ,000 to 124,00 out of work, or 4.4\%    
Revised:  The report expects this to account for 60 ,000 job losses in Scotland, with the worst level of unemployment since the 1990s - a jump of 50 ,000 to 124,00 out of work, or 4.4\% . 
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Original:  "It would be lacking in compassion, as well as irresponsible, in my view.  [  
Revised:  "It would be lacking in compassion, as well as irresponsible, in my view. " [ 
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Original:  Gordon Brown, the UK Prime Minister, however has stated that "I don't see this as a gamble, I see this as necessary, responsible action, that any sensible government would want to take."
Revised:  Gordon Brown: "I don't see this as a gamble, I see this as necessary, responsible action, that any sensible government would want to take." Gordon Brown, the UK Prime Minister, however has stated that "I don't see this as a gamble, I see this as necessary, responsible action, that any sensible government would want to take."
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Original:  And that's a much better way of concentrating resources where it needs it.  
Revised:  And that's a much better way of concentrating resources where it needs it. " 
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Original: The UK Government has announced that it is cutting the rate of Value Added Tax (VAT) by 2.5\%  to 15\%, in a move to get consumers spending again.
Revised: The UK Government has announced that it is cutting the rate of Value Added Tax (VAT) by 2.5\% , to 15\%, in a move to get consumers spending again.
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Original:  In his statement announcing the move, Alistair Darling, the Chancellor of the Exchequer has admitted that, over the next year, national debt will go up from 2.8\% to 4.4\% over the next year, although he stated that they were necessary to avoid a recession   .
Revised:  In his statement announcing the move, Alistair Darling, the Chancellor of the Exchequer has admitted that, over the next year, national debt will go up from 2.8\% to 4.4\% over the next year, although he stated that they were necessary to avoid a recession . .
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Original: This move, along other tax cuts, are, according to experts, going to require the government to increase borrowing to record levels, according to experts cited by BBC News.
Revised: This move, along other tax cuts, is going to require the government to increase borrowing to record levels, according to experts cited by BBC News.
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Original:  Gordon Brown, the UK Prime Minister, however has statedthat "I don't see this as a gamble, I see this as necessary, responsible action, that any sensible government would want to take." "Those people who say do nothing now, would leave people, as in the 1980s and 1990s, without hope that their mortgage problems could be sorted out, or their jobs problems could be sorted out," he continued , in a discussion on BBC television programme "The Politics Show".
Revised:  Gordon Brown, the UK Prime Minister, has stated, "I don't see this as a gamble, I see this as necessary, responsible action, that any sensible government would want to take." "Those people who say do nothing now, would leave people, as in the 1980s and 1990s, without hope that their mortgage problems could be sorted out, or their jobs problems could be sorted out," he continued , in a discussion on BBC television programme "The Politics Show".
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Original:  Gordon Brown, the UK Prime Minister, however has statedthat "I don't see this as a gamble, I see this as necessary, responsible action, that any sensible government would want to take." "Those people who say do nothing now, would leave people, as in the 1980s and 1990s, without hope that their mortgage problems could be sorted out, or their jobs problems could be sorted out," he continued , in a discussion on BBC television programme "The Politics Show".
Revised:  Gordon Brown, the UK Prime Minister, however has statedthat "I don't see this as a gamble, I see this as necessary, responsible action, that any sensible government would want to take." "Those people who say do nothing now, would leave people, as in the 1980s and 1990s, without hope that their mortgage problems could be sorted out, or their jobs problems could be sorted out," he continued in a discussion on BBC television programme "The Politics Show".
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Original:  In his statement announcing the move, Alistair Darling, the Chancellor of the Exchequer has admitted that , over the next year, national debt will go up from 2.8\% to 4.4\% over the next year, although he stated that they were necessary to avoid a recession.
Revised:  In his statement announcing the move, Alistair Darling, the Chancellor of the Exchequer has admitted that the national debt will go up from 2.8\% to 4.4\% over the next year, although he stated that they were necessary to avoid a recession.
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Original:  In his statement announcing the move, Alistair Darling, the Chancellor of the Exchequer has admitted that , over the next year, national debt will go up from 2.8\% to 4.4\% over the next year, although he stated that they were necessary to avoid a recession.
Revised:  In his statement announcing the move, Alistair Darling, the Chancellor of the Exchequer has admitted that , over the next year, national debt will go up from 2.8\% to 4.4\% over the next year, although he stated that these changes were necessary to avoid a recession.
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Original:  The move will last until the end of next year , and it will come into effect next Monday , and Darling stated that it will cost the government 12.5 billion GBP.
Revised:  The move , which will come into effect next Monday, will last until the end of next year , and it will come into effect next Monday , and Darling stated that it will cost the government 12.5 billion GBP.
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Original:  The move will last until the end of next year , and it will come into effect next Monday , and Darling stated that it will cost the government 12.5 billion GBP.
Revised:  The move will last until the end of next year , and Darling stated that it will cost the government 12.5 billion GBP.
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Original:  Many felt it would never happen, with several release dates passing and Dr Pepper making good on a promise of a free can to every US citizen if the album came out this year   
Revised:  Many felt it would never happen, with several release dates passing and Dr Pepper making good on a promise of a free can to every US citizen if the album came out this year . 
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Original:  Actually, Dr Pepper isn 't giving quite everyone a free can.
Revised:  Actually, Dr Pepper aren 't giving quite everyone a free can.
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Original:  He could be jailed for three years, or longer if he made money by putting the songs online  
Revised:  He could be jailed for three years, or longer if he made money by putting the songs online . 
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Original:  The polls , which elect in several executive and legislative across cities and states, are considered by Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez's opponents and supporters as a potentially important political gain or loss since Chavez's failed constitutional referendums last year.
Revised:  The polls will elect mayors, governors and legislators across the country, and are considered by Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez's opponents and supporters as a potentially important political gain or loss since Chavez's failed constitutional referendums last year.
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Original:  Despite many supporters' adoration of Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept .
Revised:  Despite many supporters' adoration of Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept 
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Original:  Despite many supporters' adoration of Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept  
Revised:  Despite many supporters' adoration of Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept . 
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Original: Among his supporters, he is regarded as a populist for turning the nation's massive oil wealth into capital for schools, hospitals, and subsidized food.
Revised: Among his supporters, he is regarded as a populist for turning the nation's massive oil wealth into schools, hospitals, and subsidized food.
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Original:  While there is truth to both sides, times have become difficult and reality is taking shape : the Venezuelan economy is taking a beating as oil prices continue to drop, and the nation's inflation rate is the highest in South America;
Revised:  While there is truth to both sides, times have become difficult : the Venezuelan economy is taking a beating as oil prices continue to drop, and the nation's inflation rate is the highest in South America;
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Original:  Despite many supporters' adoration of Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept.
Revised:  Despite many supporters' fervent loyalty for Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept.
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Original:  But as Chávez refers to the mayors and governors up for election as "my candidates", it's apparent that this is as much about the President as local politics
Revised:  But as Chávez refers to the mayors and governors up for election as "my candidates", he made it clear that this is as much about the President as local politics
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Original: One of the year-old referenda  would have allowed the President of Venezuela to be re-elected indefinitely, which was narrowly defeated in late 2007.
Revised: One of the year-old referenda would have allowed the President of Venezuela to be re-elected indefinitely, which was narrowly defeated .
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Original:  Despite many supporters' fervent loyalty for Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept .
Revised:  Despite many supporters' fervent loyalty for Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept 
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Original:  Among his supporters, he is regarded as a leader with great concern for the people, for turning the nation's massive oil wealth into  schools, hospitals, and subsidized food.
Revised:  Among his supporters, he is regarded as a leader with great concern for the people, for turning the nation's massive oil wealth into capital for schools, hospitals, and subsidized food.
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Original:  Among his opponents, he is regarded as a dictatorial , populist, ineffective leaderwho has failed to bring security and prosperity from this wealth, wasting it in soft loans to friendly countries and purchasing their debts while ignoring the dire needs back home .
Revised:  Among his opponents, he is regarded as a dictatorial and ineffective leader .
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Original:  Despite many supporters' fervent loyalty for Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept.
Revised:  Despite many supporters' adoration of Chávez, it appears that there are some promises that have not been kept.
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Original:   But as Chávez refers to the mayors and governors up for election as "my candidates", he made itclear that this is as much about him as about local politics.
Revised:  But as Chávez refers to the mayors and governors up for election as "my candidates", it's apparent that this is as much about him as about local politics.
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Original:  But as Chávez refers to the mayors and governors up for election as "my candidates", it's apparent that this is as much about the President as local politics  
Revised:  But as Chávez refers to the mayors and governors up for election as "my candidates", it's apparent that this is as much about the President as local politics . 
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Original:  But as Chávez refers to the mayors and governors up for election as "my candidates", it's apparent that this is as much about the President as local politics . Results The opposition won in 5 out of 22 states - the two they had won in 2004 (Zulia and Nueva Esparta), plus Miranda, Carabobo and Táchira.
Revised:  But as Chávez refers to the mayors and governors up for election as "my candidates", it's apparent that this is as much about the President as local politics Results The opposition won in 5 out of 22 states - the two they had won in 2004 (Zulia and Nueva Esparta), plus Miranda, Carabobo and Táchira.
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Original:  Also in Caracas, the opposition won city hall in the election . Rural voters were the largest pro-Chavez constituency, though discontent over crime, the economy and poor public services have left some citizens unimpressed with Chavez after 10 years as president.
Revised:  Also in Caracas, the opposition won city hall in the election . Rural voters were the largest pro-Chavez constituency, but discontent over crime, the economy and poor public services have left some citizens unimpressed with Chavez after 10 years as president.
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Original: Venezuelan President Hugo Chavez 's party won a majority of seats during this Sunday's election, although his opposition has made important headway.
Revised: Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez 's party won a majority of seats during this Sunday's election, although his opposition has made important headway.
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Original:  The election has been regarded as a test of Chavez 's influence after his failed constitutional overhaul last year.
Revised:  The election has been regarded as a test of Chávez 's influence after his failed constitutional overhaul last year.
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Original:  Pro-Chavez candidates held on to 17 gubernatorial posts, a majority of the 22 up for election, but the opposition has won five states including Miranda.
Revised:  Pro-Chávez candidates held on to 17 gubernatorial posts, a majority of the 22 up for election, but the opposition has won five states including Miranda.
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Original:  Rural voters were the largest pro-Chavez constituency, but discontent over crime, the economy, and poor public services have left some citizens unimpressed with Chavez after 10 years as president.
Revised:  Rural voters were the largest pro-Chávez constituency, but discontent over crime, the economy, and poor public services have left some citizens unimpressed with Chavez after 10 years as president.
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Original:  Rural voters were the largest pro-Chavez constituency, but discontent over crime, the economy, and poor public services have left some citizens unimpressed with Chavez after 10 years as president.
Revised:  Rural voters were the largest pro-Chavez constituency, but discontent over crime, the economy, and poor public services have left some citizens unimpressed with Chávez after 10 years as president.
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Original:  While Chavez has called the election "a categorical success", opposition leader Manuel Rosales said that "what's important is that the map of Venezuela has started to change.
Revised:  While Chávez has called the election "a categorical success", opposition leader Manuel Rosales said that "what's important is that the map of Venezuela has started to change.
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Original:  The opposition also won Caracas' s city hall.
Revised:  The opposition also won Caracas' city hall.
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Original: Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez's party won a majority of seats during this Sunday's election, although his opposition has made important headway.
Revised: Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez's party won a majority of states during this Sunday's election, although his opposition has made important headway.
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Original:  Each Falcon 9 rocket uses 9 Merlin engines A computer simulation of a Merlin 9 launch At 10:30pm on November 23, 2008 at the airport in McGregor, Texas, Space Exploration Technologies Corporation (SpaceX) tested their new Falcon 9 rocket at full thrust for nearly 3 minutes ( 177 seconds).
Revised:  Each Falcon 9 rocket uses 9 Merlin engines A computer simulation of a Merlin 9 launch At 10:30pm on November 23, 2008 , near the airport in McGregor, Texas, Space Exploration Technologies Corporation (SpaceX) tested their new Falcon 9 rocket at full thrust for nearly 3 minutes ( 177 seconds).
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Original:  They weren’t moving," said Lauren Dreyer  SpaceX's manager for business development.
Revised:  They weren’t moving," said Lauren Dreyer , SpaceX's manager for business development.
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Original:  This was the first major testing, and marks a major milestone for the company in its plans to capture a section of the commercial launch market.
Revised:  This was the first major test firing, and it marks a milestone for the company in its plans to capture a section of the commercial launch market.
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Original:  "I appreciate the fact that the company notified  McGregor, but did they not think the test would affect the surrounding communities?"  commenter Lorena Resident said on the website for the Waco Tribune-Herald.
Revised:  "I appreciate the fact that the company notified the City of McGregor, but did they not think the test would affect the surrounding communities?" commenter Lorena Resident said on the website for the Waco Tribune-Herald.
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Original:  "I appreciate the fact that the company notified  McGregor, but did they not think the test would affect the surrounding communities?"  commenter Lorena Resident said on the website for the Waco Tribune-Herald.
Revised:  "I appreciate the fact that the company notified McGregor, but did they not think the test would affect the surrounding communities?" asked commenter Lorena Resident said on the website for the Waco Tribune-Herald.
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