wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Climb Up the 50 is based in the U.S. , with participants climbing or hiking up the highest point in their state sometime during May 23–31.
Revised:  Climb Up the 50 is based in the United States , with participants climbing or hiking up the highest point in their state sometime during May 23–31.
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Original:  Teams of people will join  to climb the highest peak in their state.
Revised:  Other teams of people will join to climb the highest peak in their state.
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Original:  Teams of people will join  to climb the highest peak in their state.
Revised:  Teams of people will join them to climb the highest peak in their state.
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Original:  The highest peak in the country is found in Alaska — Denali (Mount McKinley) — at over 20,000 feet above sea level.
Revised:  The highest peak in the country is located in Alaska — Denali (Mount McKinley) — at over 20,000 feet above sea level.
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Original:  Climb Up the World participants can engage in the event by running, climbing, hiking or cycling — where ever in the world they are — on Sept. 19 or 20.
Revised:  Climb Up the World participants can engage in the event by running, climbing, hiking or cycling — where ever in the world they are — on September 19 or 20.
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Original:  This 10-day climb will take place Sept. 11–24.
Revised:  This 10-day climb will take place September 11–24.
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Original:  The AFCA's aid in HIV/AIDS stricken countries does not go unnoticed.
Revised:  The AFCA's assistance in HIV/AIDS stricken countries does not go unnoticed.
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Original: Mount Kilimanjaro  Florida has the lowest peak, with an elevation of only 345 feet above sea level.
Revised: Mount Kilimanjaro . Florida has the lowest peak, with an elevation of only 345 feet above sea level.
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Original:  The area was reopened . List of Location Boston, Massachusetts Washington, D.C. California San Francisco Sacramento Pleasanton, Calif.
Revised:  The area was reopened List of Location Boston, Massachusetts Washington, D.C. California San Francisco Sacramento Pleasanton, Calif.
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Original: In Washington, D.C., a couple  thousand protesters demonstrated outside the White House about taxes and excess spending by the national government.
Revised: In Washington, D.C., a couple of thousand protesters demonstrated outside the White House about taxes and excess spending by the national government.
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Original:  With the area cleared, a bomb squad robot inspected the package that happen to be a box of tea bags.
Revised:  With the area cleared, a bomb squad robot inspected the package that turned out to be a box of tea bags.
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Original: Grassroots anti-tax anti-spending rallies call Tea Parties occurred across the United States Wednesday.
Revised: Anti-tax anti-spending rallies call Tea Parties occurred across the United States Wednesday.
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Original: Grassroots anti-tax anti-spending rallies call Tea Parties occurred across the United States Wednesday.
Revised: Grassroots anti-tax anti-spending rallies called Tea Parties took place across the United States Wednesday.
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Original:  The rallies were held in various location from Boston, Massachusetts to San Francisco, California.
Revised:  The rallies were held in various locations from Boston, Massachusetts to San Francisco, California.
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Original:  Organizers indicated that Tax Parties took place at more than 850 locations with any where from 750,000 to over 1 million attendees.
Revised:  Organizers indicated that Tea Parties took place at more than 850 locations with any where from 750,000 to over 1 million attendees.
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Original:  Organizers indicated that Tax Parties took place at more than 850 locations with any where from 750,000 to over 1 million attendees.
Revised:  Organizers indicated that Tax Parties took place at more than 850 locations , with a combined total of 750,000 to over 1 million attendees.
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Original:  In Washington, D.C., a couple of thousand protesters demonstrated outside the White House about taxes and excess spending by the national government.
Revised:  In Washington, D.C., several thousand protesters demonstrated outside the White House about taxes and excess spending by the national government.
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Original:  The Secret Service stopped the rally after a suspicious package was tossed over the the White House fence.
Revised:  The Secret Service stopped the rally after a suspicious package was tossed over the White House fence.
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Original:  Whereas the Afghan Constitution legally upholds sexual equality, and Afghanistan at one time signed the  , it also upholds its constitutional prerogative to place Islamic beliefs ahead of all other practices.
Revised:  Whereas the legally upholds sexual equality, and Afghanistan at one time signed the , it also upholds its constitutional prerogative to place Islamic beliefs ahead of all other practices.
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Original:  "If a woman says no, the man has the right not to feed her," said Ayatollah Mohammed Asif Mohseni , Shia cleric.
Revised:  "If a woman says no, the man has the right not to feed her," said , Shia cleric.
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Original:  Men shouted “ Get out of here, you whores!
Revised:  Men shouted " Get out of here, you whores!
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Original:  Get out! ” as female protestors were disembarking from a bus.
Revised:  Get out! " as female protestors were disembarking from a bus.
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Original:  Sitara Achakza , a Woman's rights activist and member of Kandahar 's provincial council, was murdered at her home on Sunday, April 12 by Taliban gunmen.
Revised:  , a Woman's rights activist and member of Kandahar 's provincial council, was murdered at her home on Sunday, April 12 by Taliban gunmen.
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Original:  Sitara Achakza , a Woman's rights activist and member of Kandahar 's provincial council, was murdered at her home on Sunday, April 12 by Taliban gunmen.
Revised:  Sitara Achakza , a Woman's rights activist and member of 's provincial council, was murdered at her home on Sunday, April 12 by Taliban gunmen.
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Original:  The law has had separate interpretations because at one point during the rally both sides chanted “ We want honour and dignity for women", and "Allah Akbar," or God is great.
Revised:  The law has had separate interpretations because at one point during the rally both sides chanted " We want honour and dignity for women", and "Allah Akbar," or God is great.
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Original:  "We must trust Allah , instead of listening to the Western countries and the European countries who come here to meddle and interfere." said Sayed Sajat of the counter protest.
Revised:  "We must trust , instead of listening to the Western countries and the European countries who come here to meddle and interfere." said Sayed Sajat of the counter protest.
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Original: Governor of New YorkDavid PatersonNew York 's governor David Paterson today introduced a bill into the state legislature to legalize marriage between same-sex couples.
Revised: New York 's governor David Paterson today introduced a bill into the state legislature to legalize marriage between same-sex couples.
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Original: New York 's governor David Paterson today introduced a bill into the state legislature to legalize marriage between same-sex couples, although it appears to lack the necessary support in the state senate.
Revised: Governor of New York David PatersonNew York 's governor David Paterson today introduced a bill into the state legislature to legalize marriage between same-sex couples, although it appears to lack the necessary support in the state senate.
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Original:  Governor of New York David Paterson Of the four states in which same-sex marriage is presently legal: Vermont, Iowa, Massachusetts and Connecticut;
Revised:  Of the four states in which same-sex marriage is presently legal: Vermont, Iowa, Massachusetts and Connecticut;
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Original: ]]New York's governor David Paterson today introduced a bill  into the state legislature to legalize marriage between same-sex couples, although it appears to lack the necessary support in the state senate.
Revised: ]]New York's governor David Paterson introduced a bill into the state legislature to legalize marriage between same-sex couples, although it appears to lack the necessary support in the state senate.
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Original: File:David Paterson 5 by David Shankbone.jpg|Governor of New YorkDavid Paterson.
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Original:  New York 's governor David Paterson introduced a bill Thursday into the state legislature to legalize marriage between same-sex couples, although it appears to lack the necessary support in the state senate.
Revised:  New York 's governor David Paterson introduced a bill Thursday into the state legislature to legalize marriage between same-sex couples, although it appears to lack the necessary support in the state senate.
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Original: ]] "For too long, the gay and lesbian communities have been told their rights and freedoms have to wait",  Gov. Paterson said "The time has come to bring marriage equality to the State of New York."
Revised: ]] "For too long, the gay and lesbian communities have been told their rights and freedoms have to wait", said Gov. Paterson said "The time has come to bring marriage equality to the State of New York."
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Original: ]] "For too long, the gay and lesbian communities have been told their rights and freedoms have to wait",  Gov. Paterson said "The time has come to bring marriage equality to the State of New York."
Revised: ]] "For too long, the gay and lesbian communities have been told their rights and freedoms have to wait", Gov. Paterson . "The time has come to bring marriage equality to the State of New York."
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Original: Of the four states in which same-sex marriage is presently legal : Vermont, Iowa, Massachusetts and Connecticut;
Revised: Of the four states in which same-sex marriage is presently legal — Vermont, Iowa, Massachusetts and Connecticut;
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Original: Of the four states in which same-sex marriage is presently legal : Vermont, Iowa, Massachusetts and Connecticut;
Revised: Of the four states in which same-sex marriage is presently legal : Vermont, Iowa, Massachusetts , and Connecticut —
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Original:  He is rarely seen in public, and there is some speculation about his health    
Revised:  He is rarely seen in public, and there is some speculation about his health . 
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Original:  The court ordered Carl Lundström, Fredrik Neij, Gottfrid Svartholm Warg, and Peter Sunde to serve at least one year in prison and pay damages of US$4.5 million (  3.4 million EURO ).
Revised:  The court ordered Carl Lundström, Fredrik Neij, Gottfrid Svartholm Warg, and Peter Sunde to serve at least one year in prison and pay damages of US$4.5 million ( € 3.4 million EURO ).
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Original:  The court ordered Carl Lundström, Fredrik Neij, Gottfrid Svartholm Warg, and Peter Sunde to serve at least one year in prison and pay damages of US$4.5 million (  3.4 million EURO ).
Revised:  The court ordered Carl Lundström, Fredrik Neij, Gottfrid Svartholm Warg, and Peter Sunde to serve at least one year in prison and pay damages of US$4.5 million ( 3.4 million ).
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Original: The trial began two weeksago and ended on March 2.
Revised: The trial lasted two weeks, and ended on March 2.
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Original:  Investigators say at least 33 specific films and songs posted on TPB were tracked by authorities  
Revised:  Investigators say at least 33 specific films and songs posted on TPB were tracked by authorities . 
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Original:   Despite the ruling, TPB says it will not be shut down and file sharing operations will not be affected.
Revised:  The Pirate Bay logo Despite the ruling, TPB says it will not be shut down and file sharing operations will not be affected.
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Original: According to one witness, " It just all of a sudden topped over."
Revised: According to one witness, " it just all of a sudden topped over."
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Original:  Since 2001, there have only been seven report of injuries related to mechanical failures at the fair
Revised:  Since 2001, there have only been seven report of injuries related to the mechanical failures of rides at the fair
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Original:  Since 2001, there have only been seven report of injuries related to the mechanical failuresof rides at the fair
Revised:  Since 2001, there have only been seven report of injuries related to mechanical failures
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Original:  ]] At least 12 children have been injured after a swing ride at the Puyallup, Washington Spring Fair toppled over.
Revised:  ]] At least twelve children have been injured after a swing ride at the Puyallup, Washington Spring Fair toppled over.
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Original:  One other child was also hospitalized.
Revised:  Five other child were also hospitalized.
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Original: The Economist reported that the total value of residential property rose by more than $30 trillion over the past five years in developed economies, an increase equivalent to 100\% of the countries' combined GDPs of those countries.
Revised: The Economist reported that the total value of residential property rose by more than $30 trillion over the past five years in developed economies, an increase equivalent to 100\% of the combined GDPs of those countries.
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Original: Japan provides a scary example of how a boom can turn to bust.
Revised: Japan provides an example of how a boom can turn to bust.
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Original:  Property prices have dropped  40\% from their peak in 1991  ;
Revised:  Property prices have dropped 40\% from their peak in 1991 ) ;
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Original:  The Economist reported that the total value of residential property rose by more than $30 trillion over the past five years in developed economies, an increase equivalent to 100\% of the combined GDPs of those countries.
Revised:  The total value of residential property rose by more than $30 trillion over the past five years in developed economies, an increase equivalent to 100\% of the combined GDPs of those countries.
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Original:  "The Economist " newspaper said in its June 16th issue;
Revised:  The Economist newspaper said in its June 16th issue;
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Original:  "In other words, it looks like the biggest bubble in history." in reference to what 's happening with housing  in the USA and much of Europe.
Revised:  "In other words, it looks like the biggest bubble in history." by way of reference to what 's happening with housing in the USA and much of Europe.
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Original:  "In other words, it looks like the biggest bubble in history." in reference to what 's happening with housing  in the USA and much of Europe.
Revised:  "In other words, it looks like the biggest bubble in history." in reference to what is happening with housing in the USA and much of Europe.
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Original:  "In other words, it looks like the biggest bubble in history." in reference to what 's happening with housing  in the USA and much of Europe.
Revised:  "In other words, it looks like the biggest bubble in history." in reference to what 's happening with housing prices in the USA and much of Europe.
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Original:  Property prices have dropped fourteen years in a row (40\% from their peak in 1991);
Revised:  Property prices have dropped for 14 years in a row (40\% from their peak in 1991);
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Original:  For example, the National Association of Realtors (NAR) reported that 23\% of all American houses bought in 2004 were for investment, not for owners to live in and another 13\% were bought as second homes.
Revised:  For example, the National Association of Realtors (NAR) reported that 23\% of all American houses bought in 2004 were for investment, not for owners to live in . Another 13\% were bought as second homes.
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Original:  Nar also found that 42\% of all first-time buyers made no down-payment on their home purchase last year.
Revised:  NAR also found that 42\% of all first-time buyers made no down-payment on their home purchase last year.
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Original:  In Miami, as many as half of the original buyers resell new apartments even before they are built  and properties change hands two or three times before somebody finally moves in.
Revised:  In Miami, as many as half of the original buyers resell new apartments even before they are built , and properties change hands two or three times before somebody finally moves in.
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Original:  Forty Nine per cent of the surveyors reporting falling prices in May.
Revised:  49\% of their surveyors reported falling prices in May.
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Original: Houses in New Orleans The median house price in the U.S.A. plunged 6.5\% in the past month to $217,000.
Revised: Houses in New Orleans The median house price in the United States plunged 6.5\% in the past month to $217,000.
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Original:  Much of the  housing activity is now being driven by speculative demand.
Revised:  Much of the recent housing activity is now being driven by speculative demand.
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Original:  Much of the  housing activity is now being driven by speculative demand.
Revised:  Much of the housing activity is being driven by speculative demand.
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Original:  For example, the National Association of Realtors (NAR) reported that 23\% of all American houses bought in 2004 were for investment, not for owners to live in.
Revised:  The National Association of Realtors (NAR) reported that 23\% of all American houses bought in 2004 were for investment, not for owners to live in.
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Original:  Investors are buying only because they think prices will keep rising, which is the very definition of a financial bubble.
Revised:  Many investors are buying solely because they think prices will keep rising, which is the very definition of a financial bubble.
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Original:  Investors are buying only because they think prices will keep rising, which is the very definition of a financial bubble.
Revised:  Investors are buying only because they think prices will keep rising, which is a warning sign of a financial bubble.
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Original:  In Miami,  as many as half of the original buyers resell new apartments even before they are built, and properties  change hands two or three times before somebody finally moves in.
Revised:  In Miami, Florida, as many as half of the original buyers resell new apartments even before they are built, and properties change hands two or three times before somebody finally moves in.
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Original:  In Miami,  as many as half of the original buyers resell new apartments even before they are built, and properties  change hands two or three times before somebody finally moves in.
Revised:  In Miami, as many as half of the original buyers resell new apartments even before they are built, and properties can change hands two or three times before somebody finally moves in.
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Original: Houses in New Orleans The median house price in the United States plunged 6.5\% in the past month to $217,000.
Revised: Houses in New Orleans The median house price in the United States plunged 6.5\% in May to $217,000.
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Original:  Saberi could have been sentenced the maximum of 10 years in prison, this according to Iranian law.
Revised:  Saberi could have been sentenced the maximum of 10 years in prison, under to Iranian law.
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Original:  The court would not allow Saberi's lawyer to ask for bail.
Revised:  The court did not allow Saberi's lawyer to ask for bail.
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Original:  She was arrested two months ago, but according to NPR, Saberi has been in custody for three months  
Revised:  She was arrested two months ago, but according to NPR, Saberi has been in custody for three months . 
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Original: Saberi was wroking for BBC News and National Public Radio (NPR) which is located in Washington, D.C..
Revised: Saberi was working for BBC News and National Public Radio (NPR) which is located in Washington, D.C..
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Original:  Saberi could have been sentenced the maximum of 10 years in prison, under to Iranian law.
Revised:  Saberi could have been sentenced the maximum of 10 years in prison, under Iranian law.
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Original:  Saberi could have been sentenced the maximum of 10 years in prison , under Iranian law.
Revised:  Saberi could have been sentenced the maximum of 10 years in pri9son , under Iranian law.
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Original: Roxana Saberi , 31, an Iranian-American journalist who was accused of spying on Iran, has been sentenced to eight years in prison.
Revised:  , 31, an Iranian-American journalist who was accused of spying on Iran, has been sentenced to eight years in prison.
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Original:  The court did not allow Saberi's lawyer to ask for bail . "It's normal for somebody who has violated our law to be sentenced.
Revised:  The court did not allow Saberi's lawyer to ask for . "It's normal for somebody who has violated our law to be sentenced.
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Original:  Saberi was working for BBC News and National Public Radio (NPR) which is located in Washington, D.C..
Revised:  Saberi was working for and National Public Radio (NPR) which is located in Washington, D.C..
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Original: According to state television, no less than eighteen people have been killed andn a further six injured after an explosion at a coal mine in central China.
Revised: According to state television, no less than eighteen people have been killed and a further six injured after an explosion at a coal mine in central China.
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Original:  The incident occurred at afternoon on Friday  at the Qingshanbei mine in Chenzhou city, located in the Hunan province.
Revised:  The incident occurred during the afternoon on Friday at the Qingshanbei mine in Chenzhou city, located in the Hunan province.
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Original:  The Xinhua news agency reports that two other people had been reported missing after the explosion.
Revised:  The Xinhua News Agency reports that two other people had been reported missing after the explosion.
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Original:  China is notorious for having some of the world's most dangerous mines.
Revised:  China is reported to have some of the world's most dangerous mines.
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Original:  The safety record has been slightly improving, however, as the death toll for 2008 saw a fifteen percent drop, with 3,215 miner deaths from accidents , following a crackdown on unsafe mines by the authorities.
Revised:  The safety record has been slightly improving, however, as the death toll for 2008 saw a fifteen percent drop, with 3,215 miner deaths from accidents . The decrease was in part, due to a crackdown on unsafe mines by the authorities.
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Original:  The actual death toll may be higher, however, as many legally-operated mines frequently do not report or hide fatalies in order not to be suspended from operating by the government
Revised:  The actual death toll may be higher, however, as many legally-operated mines frequently do not report or hide fatalities in order not to be suspended from operating by the government
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Original: The incident occurred at 16.10 local time ( 10.10 GMT).
Revised: The incident occurred at 16:10 local time ( 10.10 GMT).
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Original: The incident occurred at 16.10 local time ( 10.10 GMT).
Revised: The incident occurred at 16.10 local time ( 10:10 GMT).
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