wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Present stadiaum sign outside the club's main entrance The naming rights for , the home ground of English football club are to be put up for sale.
Revised: rightPresent stadiaum sign outside the club's main entrance The naming rights for , the home ground of English football club are to be put up for sale.
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Original: rightPresent  stadium sign outside the club's main entrance The naming rights for  , the home ground of English football club  , are to be put up for sale.
Revised: right stadium sign outside the club's main entrance The naming rights for , the home ground of English football club , are to be put up for sale.
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Original: Renaming St James's Park to Coors Light Park, Bwin Park or even the McDonalds Arena shows that Newcastle's top brass have again got it so seriously wrong George Caulkin of  wrote of the decision: The announcement came on the same day as it announced  as the club's permanent manager, and that owner Mike Ashley was taking the club off the market for a second time
Revised: Renaming St James's Park to Coors Light Park, Bwin Park or even the McDonalds Arena shows that Newcastle's top brass have again got it so seriously wrong George Caulkin of The Times wrote of the decision: The announcement came on the same day as it announced as the club's permanent manager, and that owner Mike Ashley was taking the club off the market for a second time
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Original:  Japan was ordered to stop whaling in the Antarctic, but this ruling only applied to the JARPA II program — not the annual Pacific whaling hunts.
Revised:  Japan was ordered to stop whaling in the Antarctic, but this ruling only applied to JARPA II — not the annual Pacific whaling hunts.
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Original:  Japan has maintained scientific whaling programs intend to understand the global whale populations.
Revised:  Japan has maintained scientific whaling programmes intend to understand the global whale populations.
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Original:  The research programs aim to prove the global whale population is sustainable, allowing commercial whale hunting to resume.
Revised:  The research programmes aim to prove the global whale population is sustainable, allowing commercial whale hunting to resume.
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Original:  Japan was ordered to stop whaling in the Antarctic, but this ruling only applied to JARPA II — not the annual Pacific whaling hunts.
Revised:  Japan was ordered to stop whaling in the Antarctic, but this ruling only mentioned JARPA II — not the annual Pacific whaling hunts.
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Original:  The whaling programme had been officially classified as scientific research, however when the programme had been investigated at the ICJ, the court decided Japan had not satisfied the scientific quotas it had been set to meet through this research . Japan was ordered to stop whaling in the Antarctic, but this ruling only mentioned JARPA II — not the annual Pacific whaling hunts.
Revised:  The whaling programme had been officially classified as scientific research, however when the programme had been investigated at the ICJ, the court decided there wasn't enough science involved to justify it . Japan was ordered to stop whaling in the Antarctic, but this ruling only mentioned JARPA II — not the annual Pacific whaling hunts.
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Original: This sentiment was echoed by the Japanese Prime Minister , Shinzo Abe.
Revised: This sentiment was echoed by Japanese Prime Minister , Shinzo Abe.
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Original:  According to newspaper , Abe said he " aimed for the resumption of commercial whaling by conducting whaling research in order to obtain scientific data indispensable for the management of whale resources."
Revised:  According to newspaper , Abe said he " the resumption of commercial whaling by conducting whaling research in order to obtain scientific data indispensable for the management of whale resources."
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Original:  Japan was ordered to stop whaling in the Antarctic, but this ruling only mentioned JARPA II — not the annual Pacific whaling hunts.
Revised:  They ordered Japan to stop whaling in the Antarctic, but this ruling only mentioned JARPA II — not the annual Pacific whaling hunts.
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Original: The 50 year old former Tottenham Hotspur and Republic of Ireland defender , joined the club in 2008 when he was appointed Newcastle United assistant manager by , with the club at the time in the top flight of Engish football, the .
Revised: The 50 year old former Tottenham Hotspur and Republic of Ireland defender joined the club in 2008 when he was appointed Newcastle United assistant manager by , with the club at the time in the top flight of Engish football, the .
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Original:  has been appointed permanent manager of English football club Newcastle United, having previously served as its temporary caretaker manager since the start of the season.
Revised: right has been appointed permanent manager of English football club Newcastle United, having previously served as its temporary caretaker manager since the start of the season.
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Original:  In his third spell as caretaker, he had been in charge of the club since the start of the season, and had guided the team to the top  the table, and for his efforts was awarded the twice, for August and September.
Revised:  In his third spell as caretaker, he had been in charge of the club since the start of the season, and had guided the team to the top of the table, and for his efforts was awarded the twice, for August and September.
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Original:   This is the second time Ashley has taken the club off the market after putting it up for sale.
Revised: A club statement said of the move: This is the second time Ashley has taken the club off the market after putting it up for sale.
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Original:  450 sheep leaped to their deaths in a Turkey village .
Revised:  450 sheep leapt to their deaths in a Turkey village .
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Original:  For information on the tendency of sheep to mindlessly follow each other , see Sheep ethology
Revised:  For information on the tendency of sheep to mindlessly follow each other - see Sheep ethology
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Original: Canadian folk singer, Taylor Mitchell was hiking alone, Tuesday, October 27 in Nova Scotia when she  attacked by two coyotes.
Revised: Canadian folk singer, Taylor Mitchell was hiking alone, Tuesday, October 27 in Nova Scotia when she was attacked by two coyotes.
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Original:  That evening, police found what they suspect to be the other coyote, shot it and killed  .
Revised:  That evening, police found what they suspect to be the other coyote, shot it and killed it .
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Original:  Other hikers heard screams and contacted park rangers, where they found two coyotes, shooting and injuring one as it fled.
Revised:  Another hiker heard screams and contacted park rangers, where they found two coyotes, shooting and injuring one as it fled.
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Original: Image:Nova Scotia-map.png|200px|A map of Canada highlighting Nova Scotia]] 19-year-old , Canadian folk singer, Taylor Mitchell was hiking alone, Tuesday, October 27 in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia when she was attacked by two coyotes .
Revised: Image:Nova Scotia-map.png|200px|A map of Canada highlighting Nova Scotia]] Taylor Mitchell , Canadian folk singer, Taylor Mitchell was hiking alone, Tuesday, October 27 in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia when she was attacked by two coyotes .
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Original: Image:Nova Scotia-map.png|200px|A map of Canada highlighting Nova Scotia]] 19-year-old , Canadian folk singer, Taylor Mitchell was hiking alone, Tuesday, October 27 in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia when she was attacked by two coyotes .
Revised: Image:Nova Scotia-map.png|200px|A map of Canada highlighting Nova Scotia]] 19-year-old , Canadian folk singer, Taylor Mitchell was hiking alone, Tuesday, October 27 in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia .
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Original:  Another hiker heard screams and contacted park rangers, where they found two coyotes, shooting and injuring one as it fled.
Revised:  Another hiker heard her scream and contacted park rangers, where they found two coyotes, shooting and injuring one as it fled.
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Original:  Taylor Mitchell,  Canadian folk singer, aged 19, was attacked by two coyotes while hiking alone in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia  .
Revised:  Taylor Mitchell, a Canadian folk singer, aged 19, was attacked by two coyotes while hiking alone in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia .
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Original:  Taylor Mitchell,  Canadian folk singer, aged 19, was attacked by two coyotes while hiking alone in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia  .
Revised:  Taylor Mitchell, Canadian folk singer, aged 19, was attacked by two Coyote while hiking alone in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia .
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Original:  Another hiker heard her scream and contacted park rangers, where they found two coyotes , shooting and injuring one as it fled .
Revised:  Another hiker heard her scream and contacted park rangers, where they found two coyotes . Rangers shot and injured one of the animals as it tried to flee .
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Original:  She was airlifted to a Halifax hospital in critical condition.
Revised:  Mitchell was airlifted to a Halifax hospital in critical condition.
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Original:  That evening, police found what they suspect to be the other coyote, shot it and killed it.
Revised:  That evening, police found what they suspected to be the other coyote, shot it and killed it.
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Original:  That evening, police found what they suspect to be the other coyote, shot it and killed it.
Revised:  That evening, police found what they suspect to be the other coyote, and shot and killed it.
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Original:  The animals were  "extremely aggressive" say hospital authorities, Mitchell had bite wounds covering her entire body .
Revised:  The animals were described as "extremely aggressive" say hospital authorities, Mitchell had bite wounds covering her entire body .
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Original:  The animals were  "extremely aggressive" say hospital authorities, Mitchell had bite wounds covering her entire body .
Revised:  The animals were "extremely aggressive" .
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Original:  The dead coyote was tested to determine what caused the two to attack  as coyote attacks are very rare
Revised:  The dead coyote was tested to determine what caused the two to attack , as coyote attacks are very rare
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Original:  Taylor Mitchell, a Canadian folk singer, aged 19, was attacked by two Coyote while hiking alone in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia on Wednesday .
Revised:  Taylor Mitchell, a Canadian folk singer, was attacked by two Coyote while hiking alone in Cape Breton Highlands National Park in Nova Scotia on Wednesday .
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Original:  The animals were described as "extremely aggressive"  .
Revised:  The animals were described as "extremely aggressive" by park authorities .
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Original:  Zahra Stardust (aka Marianna Leishman  is the candidate for the Australian Sex Party.
Revised:  Zahra Stardust (aka Marianna Leishman ) is the candidate for the Australian Sex Party.
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Original:  Zahra Stardust ( aka Marianna Leishman) is the candidate for the Australian Sex Party.
Revised:  Zahra Stardust ( real name Marianna Leishman) is the candidate for the Australian Sex Party.
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Original:   Why do you represent your party?
Revised:  and Why do you represent your party?
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Original:   How would you address these policies?
Revised:  / How would you address these policies?
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Original:   Is the Australian dollar's near parrity with the UD dollar a sign that the Australian economy is healthy, the US economy in chaos or both?
Revised:  / Is the Australian dollar's near parrity with the UD dollar a sign that the Australian economy is healthy, the US economy in chaos or both?
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Original:   How do you rate the governments economic stimulus package?
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Original:   Should it be wound back?
Revised:  / Should it be wound back?
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Original:   Is Kevin Rudd a better Prime Minister than John Howard?
Revised:  / Is Kevin Rudd a better Prime Minister than John Howard?
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Original:   Is the Carbon Pollution Reduction Scheme an effective sollution to climate change? Why?
Revised:  / Is the Carbon Pollution Reduction Scheme an effective sollution to climate change? Why?
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Original:   Is there a better sollution?
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Original:    Why should the electorate vote for you    
Revised:  As a party in its infancy who is not yet in the House of Representatives, we are focusing predominantly on niche issues relating to sex and gender, in which we have expertise. We look forward to formulating policies on wider issues in the public discourse such climate change, the economy and refugee issues if and when the occassion arises. Currently we are seeking to raise awareness of important topics that are remain hidden or absent from the public political agenda. Why should the electorate vote for you 
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Original:    Why should the electorate vote for you    
Revised:  Why should the electorate vote for you ? 
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Original:  We look forward to formulating policies on wider issues in the public discourse such climate change, the economy and refugee issues if and when the occassion arises.
Revised:  We look forward to formulating policies on wider issues in the public discourse such climate change, the economy and refugee issues if and when the occasion arises.
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Original: (Washington) Iraqis gather in front of Ministry of Justice building, destroyed in blast Sunday that killed at least 155 people in Baghdad, 29 Oct 2009The Iraqi military says it has arrested more than 60 security force members in connection with the recent series of bombings in Baghdad that killed about 155 people.
Revised:  Iraqis gather in front of Ministry of Justice building, destroyed in blast Sunday that killed at least 155 people in Baghdad, 29 Oct 2009The Iraqi military says it has arrested more than 60 security force members in connection with the recent series of bombings in Baghdad that killed about 155 people.
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Original: (Washington) Iraqis gather in front of Ministry of Justice building, destroyed in blast Sunday that killed at least 155 people in Baghdad, 29 Oct 2009The Iraqi military says it has arrested more than 60 security force members in connection with the recent series of bombings in Baghdad that killed about 155 people.
Revised: (Washington) The Iraqi military has said that it arrested more than 60 security force members in connection with the recent series of bombings in Baghdad that killed about 155 people.
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Original:  A military spokesman said  Thursday the arrests included 11 military officers.
Revised:  A military spokesman said on Thursday the arrests included 11 military officers.
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Original:  A military spokesman said  Thursday the arrests included 11 military officers.
Revised:  A military spokesman said Thursday the arrests included eleven military officers.
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Original:  An al-Qaida-linked group claimed responsibility for the attacks.
Revised:  An al-Qaeda-linked group claimed responsibility for the attacks.
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Original:  Some information for this report was provided by AFP and AP
Revised:  Hundreds of people were hurt and several government buildings were badly damaged after the attacks, which were the deadliest to strike the country since 2007
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Original:  Hundreds of people were hurt and several government buildings were badly damaged after the attacks, which were the deadliest to strike the country since 2007 
Revised:  Hundreds of people were hurt and several government buildings were badly damaged after the attacks, which were the deadliest to strike the country since 2007. 
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Original: An earthquake measuring 6.0 on the Richter scale hit Pakistan on Thursday 23:44 (+ 5 UTC)with the epicenter in the Hindukush mountain range.
Revised: An earthquake measuring 6.0 on the Richter scale hit Pakistan on Thursday at 23.44 local time (+ 5 UTC)with the epicenter in the Hindukush mountain range.
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Original:  The people were forced to rush out of their houses to save their lives from the tremors but no damage  was reported.
Revised:  Many people rushed out of buildings, fearing that they would collapse, but no damage was reported.
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Original:  The people were forced to rush out of their houses to save their lives from the tremors but no damage  was reported.
Revised:  The people were forced to rush out of their houses to save their lives from the tremors but no damage from the tremors was reported.
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Original:  This was the second time that the region was hit by earthquake with an epicenter in the same region of Hindukush  .
Revised:  This is the second time that the region was hit by earthquake with an epicenter in the same region of Hindukush .
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Original: As the location of the epicenter was along the border of Afghanistan, not much damage was caused.
Revised: As the location of the epicenter was along the border with Afghanistan, not much damage was caused.
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Original: The first  case of bird flu has been discovered in an isolated farm in a town just north of the capital Manila, the Philippine government has confirmed.
Revised: The first known case of bird flu has been discovered in an isolated farm in a town just north of the capital Manila, the Philippine government has confirmed.
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Original: The first  case of bird flu has been discovered in an isolated farm in a town just north of the capital Manila, the Philippine government has confirmed.
Revised: The first case of bird flu in the Phillippines has occurred at an isolated farm in a town just north of the capital Manila, the Philippine government has confirmed.
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Original:  Agricultural Secretary Arthur Yap said it is not clear whether it is the deadly H5N1 strain respnosible for the deaths of more than 50 people in Asia since 2003 but confirmed that a strain of flu, H5, had been found in ducks.
Revised:  Agricultural Secretary Arthur Yap said it is not clear whether it is the deadly H5N1 strain responsible for the deaths of more than 50 people in Asia since 2003 but confirmed that a strain of flu, H5, had been found in ducks.
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Original:  Mr  Yap told a news conference, "It is a low-risk flu strain found in three healthy ducks and the risk to human health is almost nil."
Revised:  Mr . Yap told a news conference, "It is a low-risk flu strain found in three healthy ducks and the risk to human health is almost nil."
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Original:  Three have died from H1n1 related illnesses just this past week.
Revised:  Three have died from H1N1 related illnesses just this past week.
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Original:  A spokeswoman for the New York State Department of Health, Claire Pospisil, said that "it [the declaration] helps us to be more prepared.  
Revised:  A spokeswoman for the New York State Department of Health, Claire Pospisil, said that "it [the declaration] helps us to be more prepared. " 
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Original: Painting was most famous for playing the voice of the character "Phil Archer " in BBC Radio 4 drama "The Archers" since the programme piloted on 29 May, 1950, making him involved in the series for 59 years.
Revised: Painting was most famous for playing the voice of the character Phil Archer in BBC Radio 4 drama "The Archers" since the programme piloted on 29 May, 1950, making him involved in the series for 59 years.
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Original:  Despite the long period of time on the show, he was having a reduced number of appearances in pater years due to his declining health.
Revised:  Despite the long period of time on the show, he was having a reduced number of appearances in later years due to his declining health.
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Original:  Mark Thompson, who is the BBC genral director, spoke of how he was "deeply saddened" by this happening: "He rightly became renowned for his portrayal of Phil Archer, a role he created in the pilot episode in 1950, but he was also a gifted writer and talented, versatile broadcaster.
Revised:  Mark Thompson, who is the BBC general director, spoke of how he was "deeply saddened" by this happening: "He rightly became renowned for his portrayal of Phil Archer, a role he created in the pilot episode in 1950, but he was also a gifted writer and talented, versatile broadcaster.
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Original:  The rear of the bus the and roof of the upper deck was torn off in the blast.
Revised:  The rear of the bus and the roof of the upper deck was torn off in the blast.
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Original: Ambulances in Russell Square The Commissioner of London's Metropolitan Police, Sir Ian Blair, has announced that thirteen people died when a bomb exploded on a bus in Tavistock Square.
Revised:  The Commissioner of London's Metropolitan Police, Sir Ian Blair, has announced that thirteen people died when a bomb exploded on a bus in Tavistock Square.
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Original:  It is thought that it contained less than 10 pounds (5kg) of explosives  
Revised:  It is thought that it contained less than 10 pounds (5kg) of explosives . 
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Original: Shawn Fanning, the creator of Napster and a founder of SNOCAP , Inc., on Friday revealed his plans for a legal peer-to-peer file-sharing platform.
Revised: Shawn Fanning, the creator of Napster and a founder of Snocap , Inc., on Friday revealed his plans for a legal peer-to-peer file-sharing platform.
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Original:  SNOCAP has signed an agreement with Universal Music Group to make the company's entire catalogue available through the new service.
Revised:  Snocap has signed an agreement with Universal Music Group to make the company's entire catalogue available through the new service.
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Original:  According to SNOCAP , the platform will include a copyright management interface, which will allow content owners to control the distribution of their intellectual property among users.
Revised:  According to Snocap's press release , the platform will include a copyright management interface, which will allow content owners to control the distribution of their intellectual property among users.
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Original:  The plane, a C-130 Hercules  , was carrying seven and two were on the AH-1 Super Cobra assault helicopter  
Revised:  The plane, a C-130 Hercules , was carrying seven and two were on the AH-1 SuperCobra assault helicopter. 
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Original:  Lt Josh Nelson of the Coast Guard said  " We are throwing everything we can at this right now," and stated that the crews were trained in survival techniques
Revised:  Lieutenant Josh Nelson of the Coast Guard said " We are throwing everything we can at this right now," and stated that the crews were trained in survival techniques
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Original:  Lt Josh Nelson of the Coast Guard said  " We are throwing everything we can at this right now," and stated that the crews were trained in survival techniques
Revised:  Lt Josh Nelson of the Coast Guard said that " We are throwing everything we can at this right now," and stated that the crews were trained in survival techniques
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