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Original: The rest of the candidates are below 10\% support, Scott Brison has 6.5 \% of delegates followed by former hockey great Ken Dryden with 5.2 \%, Joe Volpe with 4.1 \% and Martha Hall Findlay with 1.7\%.
Revised: The rest of the candidates are below 10\% support, Scott Brison has 6.5 \% of delegates followed by former hockey great Ken Dryden with 5.2 \%, Joe Volpe with 4 \% and Martha Hall Findlay with 1.7\%.
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Original:  In fourth place is Gerard Kennedy who has the support of 134 delegates (13.4 \%).
Revised:  Lagging behind in fourth place is Gerard Kennedy who has the support of 134 delegates (13.4 \%).
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Original:  With the results of 169 of 465 Delegate Selection Meeting reported Ignatieff leads with 563 delegates elected ( 32.2 \%) followed by two candidates vying for second place.
Revised:  With the results of 169 of 465 Delegate Selection Meeting reported Ignatieff leads with 563 delegates elected ( 30.2 \%) followed by two candidates vying for second place.
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Original:  The rest of the candidates are below 10 \% support, Scott Brison has 4.9\% of delegates followed by former hockey great Ken Dryden with 4.7\%, Joe Volpe with 3.4\% and Martha Hall Findlay with 1.1 \%.
Revised:  The rest of the candidates are below 10 \% support, former hockey great Ken Dryden has 4.9\% of delegates followed by former hockey great Ken Dryden with 4.7\%, Joe Volpe with 3.4\% and Martha Hall Findlay with 1.1 \%.
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Original:  The rest of the candidates are below 10 \% support, Scott Brison has 4.9\% of delegates followed by former hockey great Ken Dryden with 4.7\%, Joe Volpe with 3.4\% and Martha Hall Findlay with 1.1 \%.
Revised:  The rest of the candidates are below 10 \% support, Scott Brison has 4.9\% of delegates , followed by Joe Volpe with 3.4\% and Martha Hall Findlay with 1.1 \%.
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Original:  Two candidates are are in a neck-in-neck battle for third place: Gerard Kennedy has the support of 588 delegates (17.1\%) and  environment minister Stephane Dion has 569 delegates (16.5 \%).
Revised:  Two candidates are are in a neck-in-neck battle for third place: Gerard Kennedy has the support of 588 delegates (17.1\%) and former environment minister Stephane Dion has 569 delegates (16.5 \%).
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Original:  With the results of 169 of 465 Delegate Selection Meeting reported Ignatieff leads with 563 delegates elected (32.2\%) followed by two candidates vying for second place.
Revised:  With the results of 169 of 465 Delegate Selection Meetings reported, Ignatieff leads with 563 delegates elected (32.2\%) followed by two candidates vying for second place.
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Original:  A letter that had been written in 1988 by Ayatollah Ruhollah Khomeini, who lead the 1979 Iranian Revolution and is Iran's former Supreme Leader has been made public by Iran's former president Hashemi Rafsanjani and states that Iran needed and tried to aquire nuclear weapons in an attempt to win the war with Iraq.
Revised:  A letter that had been written in 1988 by Ayatollah Ruhollah Khomeini, who led the 1979 Iranian Revolution and is Iran's former Supreme Leader has been made public by Iran's former president Hashemi Rafsanjani and states that Iran needed and tried to aquire nuclear weapons in an attempt to win the war with Iraq.
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Original:  A letter that had been written in 1988 by Ayatollah Ruhollah Khomeini, who led the 1979 Iranian Revolution and is Iran's former Supreme Leader has been made public by Iran's former president Hashemi Rafsanjani and states that Iran needed and tried to aquire nuclear weapons in an attempt to win the war with Iraq.
Revised:  A letter that had been written in 1988 by Ayatollah Ruhollah Khomeini, who led the 1979 Iranian Revolution and is Iran's former Supreme Leader has been made public by Iran's former president Hashemi Rafsanjani and states that Iran needed to aquire nuclear weapons in an attempt to win the war with Iraq.
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Original: BBC  also say that Khomeini states Iran's economy "was operating at a level below zero."
Revised: BBC News also say that Khomeini states Iran's economy "was operating at a level below zero."
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Original:  The letter also states that Khomeini was "forced" into a cease-fire of the Iran-Iraq war in which he says is "like drinking poison."
Revised:  The letter also states that Khomeini was "forced" into a cease-fire of the Iran-Iraq war , which he says is "like drinking poison."
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Original:  A letter that had been written in 1988 by Ayatollah Ruhollah Khomeini, who led the 1979 Iranian Revolution and is Iran's former Supreme Leader has been made public by Iran's former president Hashemi Rafsanjani and states that Iran needed to aquire nuclear weapons in an attempt to win the war with Iraq.
Revised:  A letter that had been written in 1988 by Ayatollah Ruhollah Khomeini, who led the 1979 Iranian Revolution and is Iran's former Supreme Leader has been made public by Iran's former president Hashemi Rafsanjani and states that Iran needed to acquire nuclear weapons in an attempt to win the war with Iraq.
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Original: Imam Khomeini Picture, March 2005.
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Original: Wichita Police today arrested a suspect in the BTK killings . BTK, an acronym for "Bind, torture, kill," was the name the serial killer gave himself after killing eight people between 1974 and 1986.
Revised: Wichita Police today arrested a suspect in the BTK killings . BTK, an acronym for "Bind, torture, kill," was the name the serial killer gave himself after killing eight people between 1974 and 1986 in that manner.
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Original:  Police Chief Norman Williams spoke to reporters, saying "The bottom line, BTK is arrested.   
Revised:  Police Chief Norman Williams spoke to reporters, saying "The bottom line, BTK is arrested. " 
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Original:  Police Chief Normal Williams spoke to reporters, saying "The bottom line, BTK is arrested."
Revised:  Police Chief Norman Williams spoke to reporters, saying "The bottom line, BTK is arrested."
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Original: BTK was noutorious not only for his brutal way of killing people, but for tauning police and other investigators with letters throughout his 12-year killing spree.
Revised: BTK was notorious not only for his brutal way of killing people, but for tauning police and other investigators with letters throughout his 12-year killing spree.
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Original: BTK was noutorious not only for his brutal way of killing people, but for tauning police and other investigators with letters throughout his 12-year killing spree.
Revised: BTK was noutorious not only for his brutal way of killing people, but for taunting police and other investigators with letters throughout his 12-year killing spree.
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Original:  He was later linked to 2 unsolved murders, which took place in 1985 and 1991.
Revised:  He was later linked to two unsolved murders, which took place in 1985 and 1991.
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Original:  Investigators had run out of leads until police recieved a letter from BTK in March of last year
Revised:  Investigators had run out of leads until police received a letter from BTK in March of last year
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Original:  Investigators had run out of leads until police received a letter from BTK in March of last year  
Revised:  Investigators had run out of leads until police received a letter from BTK in March of last year . 
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Original:  Police Chief Norman Williams publically announced the guilt of Mr. Rader prior to any trial preparations by saying to reporters "The bottom line, BTK is arrested."
Revised:  Police Chief Norman Williams publically announced the guilt of Mr. Rader prior to any trial preparations when he said to reporters "The bottom line, BTK is arrested."
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Original:  Police Chief Norman Williams publically announced the guilt of Mr. Rader prior to any trial preparations when he said to reporters "The bottom line, BTK is arrested."
Revised:  Police Chief Norman Williams publicly announced the guilt of Mr. Rader prior to any trial preparations when he said to reporters "The bottom line, BTK is arrested."
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Original:  The video, which is 18 minutes long and titled "Bush, the Pope, Darfur and the Crusades" was released by IntelCenter and was prodecuced by the media agency as-Sahab .
Revised:  The video, which is 18 minutes long and titled "Bush, the Pope, Darfur and the Crusades" was released by IntelCenter and was produced by the media agency as-Sahab .
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Original:  The video, which is 18 minutes long and titled "Bush, the Pope, Darfur and the Crusades" was released by IntelCenter and was prodecuced by the media agency as-Sahab .
Revised:  The video, which is 18 minutes long and titled "Bush, the Pope, Darfur and the Crusades" was released by IntelCenter and was prodecuced by the media agency al-Sahab .
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Original: Image:Zawahiri.jpg|Photo from the FBI's website of Ayman al-Zawahri.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Can't you be honest at least once in your life, and admit that you are a deceitful liar who intentionally deceived your nation when you drove them to war in Iraq?" said Zawahiri.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  "Bush, you deceitful charlatan, 3 1/ \[ 2 years have passed since your capture of Khalid Sheikh Mohammed, so how have you found us during this time?
Revised:  \[ 2 years have passed since your capture of Khalid Sheikh Mohammed, so how have you found us during this time?
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the video, Zawahiri also criticizes the Pope Benedict XVI for comments he made against Muslims in a speech on September 12, 2006 and also calls for the Pope and all Christians to "become Muslims." "This charlatan Benedict brings back to our memories the speech of his predecessor charlatan Urban II in the 11th century …
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "This charlatan Benedict brings back to our memories the speech of his predecessor charlatan Urban II in the 11th century …
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Original:  Zawahiri also said that sending any peacekeepers to the Darfur Region of Sudan is a "crusader plan" and that all Muslims in the region "should defend themselves."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "There is a Crusader plan to send Crusaders forces to Darfur that is about to become a new field of the Crusades war.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "There is a Crusader plan to send Crusaders forces to Darfur that is about to become a new field of the Crusades war.
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Original:  The U.S. intelligance agency, the CIA has confirmed that the tape is authentic and that the person appearing in the video is Zawahiri.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "After conducting a technical analysis of the videotape, the CIA can confirm with confidence that the voice on the tape is that of Ayman al-Zawahri," said spokeswoman for the CIA, Michele Neff.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  It is not known exactly when the video was made, but United States officials say that it was written after September 12, the day of the Pope's speech.
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Original:  "Can't you be honest at least once in your life, and admit that you are a deceitful liar who intentionally deceived your nation when you drove them to war in Iraq?" said Zawahiri.
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Original: "This charlatan Benedict brings back to our memories the speech of his predecessor charlatan Urban II in the 11th century …
Revised: "This charlatan Benedict brings back to our memories the speech of his predecessor charlatan Urban II in the 11th century ...
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Original:  Two French teachers unions have issued statments defending Mr. Redeker right to speak freely while also criticizing his statments .
Revised:  Two French teachers unions have issued statments defending Mr. Redeker right to speak freely while also criticizing his statements .
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Original:  Two French teachers unions have issued statments defending Mr. Redeker right to speak freely while also criticizing his statements.
Revised:  Two French teachers unions have issued statements defending Mr. Redeker right to speak freely while also criticizing his statements.
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Original: Robert Redeker, a French writer and college tutor in Toulouse, is now in hiding after receiving a series of death threats , apparently from Islamic fundamentalists .
Revised: Robert Redeker, a French writer and college tutor in Toulouse, is now in hiding after receiving a series of death threats from Islamic fundamentalists .
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Original:  ” But later issues apologies.
Revised:  " But later issues apologies.
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Original:  Education Minister Gilles de Robien expressed “solidarity” with Mr. Redeker but also criticized him for not showing "prudence and moderation".
Revised:  Education Minister Gilles de Robien expressed "solidarity" with Mr. Redeker but also criticized him for not showing "prudence and moderation".
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Original:  It included a live demonstration of adding new content to Wikinews.
Revised:  It included a live demonstration of adding new content to Wikinews.
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Original: According to  ]  Baradello, the report, which took place on Monday, February 21. 2005, provided a "basic overview of its history (evolution), ownership, viewership, and position in the news market."
Revised: According to an ] Baradello, the report, which took place on Monday, February 21. 2005, provided a "basic overview of its history (evolution), ownership, viewership, and position in the news market."
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Original: According to  ]  Baradello, the report, which took place on Monday, February 21. 2005, provided a "basic overview of its history (evolution), ownership, viewership, and position in the news market."
Revised: According to ] from Baradello, the report, which took place on Monday, February 21. 2005, provided a "basic overview of its history (evolution), ownership, viewership, and position in the news market."
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Original: Baradello's report is available on the class blog: the course's blog.
Revised: Baradello's report is available on the course's blog.
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Original: According to an email from Baradello, the report, which took place on Monday, February 21. 2005, provided a "basic overview of its history (evolution), ownership, viewership, and position in the news market."
Revised: According to an email from Baradello, the report, which took place on Monday, 21 February 2005, provided a "basic overview of its history (evolution), ownership, viewership, and position in the news market."
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Original:  His final course paper on the decentralization of news gathering includes a case study on Wikinews with commentary from Jimmy Wales and will be available in PDF form by late May . Category:United States Category:Education Category:publish
Revised:  His final course paper on the decentralization of news gathering includes a case study on Wikinews with commentary from Jimmy Wales and will be available in PDF form by late May Category:United States Category:Education Category:publish
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Original:  His final course paper on the decentralization of news gathering includes a case study on Wikinews with commentary from Jimmy Wales and will be available in PDF form by late May . Category:United States Category:Education Category:publish
Revised:  His final course paper on the decentralization of news gathering includes a case study on Wikinews with commentary from Jimmy Wales and will be available in PDF form by late May . 
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Original: In one of College Football's oldest Rivalries , the University of Michigan Wolverines take back the Little Brown Jug, 28-21 in a game at Minnesota.
Revised: In one of College Football's oldest rivalries , the University of Michigan Wolverines take back the Little Brown Jug, 28-21 in a game at Minnesota.
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Original:  Australian Paralympic Committee offices located offsite|left London, England— With less than forty-eight hours before the start of the 2012 Summer Paralympics , National Paralympic Committees have different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
Revised:  Australian Paralympic Committee . London, England— With less than forty-eight hours before the start of the 2012 Summer Paralympics , National Paralympic Committees have different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
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Original:  Australian Paralympic Committee offices located offsite|left London, England— With less than forty-eight hours before the start of the 2012 Summer Paralympics , National Paralympic Committees have different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
Revised:  Australian Paralympic Committee offices located offsite|left London, England— With under forty-eight hours before the start of the 2012 Summer Paralympics , National Paralympic Committees have different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
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Original:  Australian Paralympic Committee offices located offsite|left London, England— With less than forty-eight hours before the start of the 2012 Summer Paralympics , National Paralympic Committees have different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
Revised:  Australian Paralympic Committee offices located offsite|left London, England— With less than forty-eight hours until the start of the 2012 Summer Paralympics , National Paralympic Committees have different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
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Original:  Australian Paralympic Committee offices located offsite|left London, England— With less than forty-eight hours before the start of the 2012 Summer Paralympics , National Paralympic Committees have different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
Revised:  Australian Paralympic Committee offices located offsite|left London, England— With less than forty-eight hours before the start of the , National Paralympic Committees have different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
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Original:  Australian Paralympic Committee offices located offsite|left London, England— With less than forty-eight hours before the start of the 2012 Summer Paralympics , National Paralympic Committees have different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
Revised:  Australian Paralympic Committee offices located offsite|left London, England— With less than forty-eight hours before the start of the 2012 Summer Paralympics , National Paralympic Committees are at different levels of preparedness in terms of sharing their message with the press.
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Original:  One of  three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
Revised:  One of the three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
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Original:  One of  three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
Revised:  One of three teams with a presence in the Paralympics Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
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Original:  One of  three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
Revised:  One of three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the , have prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
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Original:  One of  three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
Revised:  One of three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide which is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
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Original:  One of  three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
Revised:  One of three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online ; unfortunately, they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
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Original:  One of  three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still waiting for the paper copies to arrive from Canada .
Revised:  One of three teams with a presence in the Paralympic Media Press Centre (MPC), the has prepared a media guide that is available online , but they are still awaiting the arrival of paper copies from .
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Original:  Also based at the MPC,  opted to go paperless.
Revised:  Also based at the MPC, the delegation opted to go paperless.
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Original:  Instead, they had their media guide available online and would release it on a USB dongle at a later date.
Revised:  Instead, made their media guide available online and would release it on a USB dongle at a later date.
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Original:  Instead, they had their media guide available online and would release it on a USB dongle at a later date.
Revised:  Instead, they had their media guide available online , with plans to release it on a USB dongle at a later date.
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Original:  Instead, they had their media guide available online and would release it on a USB dongle at a later date.
Revised:  Instead, they had their media guide available online and would release it on a at a later date.
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Original:  The MPC based were the only National Paralympic Committee on site to have a paper media guide.
Revised:  The MPC-based were the only National Paralympic Committee on site to have a paper media guide.
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Original:  The MPC based were the only National Paralympic Committee on site to have a paper media guide.
Revised:  The MPC based were the only National Committee on-site providing a paper media guide.
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Original:  It is written only in Portuguese, though they are planning on publishing translated versions soon.
Revised:  Written only in Portuguese, though they are planning on publishing translated versions soon.
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Original:  It is written only in Portuguese, though they are planning on publishing translated versions soon.
Revised:  It is written only in Portuguese, they plan on publishing translated versions soon.
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Original:  The (APC) chose to be based offsite, with an office the Novotel Tower Bridge.
Revised:  The (APC) chose to be based off-site in the Novotel, Tower Bridge.
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Original:  According to APC representative Tony Naar, they have close relationship with all the media organizations who sent reporters to London;
Revised:  According to APC representative Tony Naar, they have close relationships with all the media organizations who sent reporters to London;
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