wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Steve Jobs, the Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers  conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that  “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
Revised:  Steve Jobs, the Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that , “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
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Original:  Apple have claimed that the 3G iPhone will provide internet access at double the speed of the internet access provided by the previous versions.
Revised:  Apple has claimed that the 3G iPhone will provide internet access at double the speed of the internet access provided by the previous versions.
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Original:  Steve Jobs, the Apple Chief Executive Officer, announced the development at a developers' s conference, where he promoted the iPhone by saying that, “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
Revised:  Steve Jobs, the Apple Chief Executive Officer, announced the development at a developers' conference, where he promoted the iPhone by saying that, “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
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Original:  At least 145 people in arounf 16 states have been infected with the bacteria known as Salmonella Saintpaul.
Revised:  At least 145 people in around 16 states have been infected with the bacteria known as Salmonella Saintpaul.
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Original: The CBC's latest license to broadcast The Hockey Theme had expired at the conclusion of the latest NHL season.
Revised: The Canadian Broadcasting Corporation's (CBC) latest license to broadcast The Hockey Theme had expired at the conclusion of the latest NHL season.
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Original: 100 px|CTV has bought rights to broadcast The Hockey Theme 90 px|The Hockey Theme was the former theme song of Hockey Night in Canada The CTV Television Network has acquired the rights to The Hockey Theme.
Revised:  The CTV Television Network has acquired the rights to The Hockey Theme.
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Original: New revelations surfaced on Saturday, the 28th , that suggest that the US and UK began war operations in Iraq prior to a declaration of war.
Revised: New information surfaced on Saturday, the 28th , that suggest that the US and UK began war operations in Iraq prior to a declaration of war.
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Original:  The ministry of Defence figures, provided in response to a question from Sir Menzies Campbell, the Lib Dem foreign affairs spokesman, show that RAF and US aircraft doubled the rate at which they were dropping bombs on Iraq beginning in May of 2002.
Revised:  The ministry of Defence figures, provided in response to a question from Sir Menzies Campbell, the Liberal Democrat foreign affairs spokesman, show that RAF and US aircraft doubled the rate at which they were dropping bombs on Iraq beginning in May of 2002.
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Original:  The ministry of Defence figures, provided in response to a question from Sir Menzies Campbell, the Lib Dem foreign affairs spokesman, show that RAF and US aircraft doubled the rate at which they were dropping bombs on Iraq beginning in May of 2002.
Revised:  The ministry of Defence figures, provided in response to a question from Sir Menzies Campbell, the Lib Dem foreign affairs spokesman, show that allied aircraft doubled the rate at which they were dropping bombs on Iraq beginning in May of 2002.
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Original: Allied commander Tommy Franks has admitted that this operation was designed to "degrade" Iraqi air defences in the same way as the air attacks that began the 1991 Gulf war, but according to legal guidance appended to the Downing Street memo (dated 23 July 2002) the allied aircraft were only "entitled to use force in self-defence where such a use of force is a necessary and proportionate response to actual or imminent attack from Iraqi ground systems".
Revised: Allied commander Tommy Franks admitted that this operation was designed to "degrade" Iraqi air defences in the same way as the air attacks that began the 1991 Gulf war, but according to legal guidance appended to the Downing Street memo (dated 23 July 2002) the allied aircraft were only "entitled to use force in self-defence where such a use of force is a necessary and proportionate response to actual or imminent attack from Iraqi ground systems".
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Original:  According to military documents shown to the Sunday Express in 2002, the Allies invaded Iraq from Turkey on August 8th, 2002, after an air strike on the 6th that took out a crucial air defence system.
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Original: Progressives all over the globe are hailing this as a major victory over the imperialist Americans.
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Original:  In other news, UN raping women in the Congo on the uprise.
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Original:  William Shulz , the executive director of the U.S. branch of Amnesty International, says that governments have an obligation under international law to conduct investigations into alleged human rights violations.
Revised:  William Schulz , the executive director of the U.S. branch of Amnesty International, says that governments have an obligation under international law to conduct investigations into alleged human rights violations.
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Original:  Shulz claims that similar measures could apply to members of the current U.S. administration such as Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld or Attorney General Alberto Gonzales.
Revised:  Schulz claims that similar measures could apply to members of the current U.S. administration such as Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld or Attorney General Alberto Gonzales.
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Original:  In his speech, Shulz also named former CIA Director George Tenet, Lt. Gen. Ricardo Sanchez, Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, former commander of US forces in Iraq and current commander of the Joint Task Force Guantanamo, and Douglas Feith, the Under Secretary of Defense for Policy.
Revised:  In his speech, Schulz also named former CIA Director George Tenet, Lt. Gen. Ricardo Sanchez, Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, former commander of US forces in Iraq and current commander of the Joint Task Force Guantanamo, and Douglas Feith, the Under Secretary of Defense for Policy.
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Original:   " If those investigations support prosecution, the governments should arrest any official who enters their territory and begin legal proceedings against them," said Shulz.
Revised:  " If those investigations support prosecution, the governments should arrest any official who enters their territory and begin legal proceedings against them," 
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Original:  Schulz claims that similar measures could apply to members of the current U.S. administration such as Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld or Attorney General Alberto Gonzales .
Revised:  Schulz claims that similar measures could apply to members of the current U.S. administration such as Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld or Attorney General Alberto Gonzales 
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Original:  In his speech, Schulz also named former CIA Director George Tenet, Lt. Gen. Ricardo Sanchez, Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, former commander of US forces in Iraq and current commander of the Joint Task Force Guantanamo, and Douglas Feith, the Under Secretary of Defense for Policy .
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Original:  "The refusal of the U.S. governemnt to conduct a truly independent investigation into the abuses at Abu-Gharib and other dentention centers is tantamount to a white-wash, if not a cover-up of these disgracefull events.
Revised:  "The refusal of the U.S. government to conduct a truly independent investigation into the abuses at Abu-Gharib and other dentention centers is tantamount to a white-wash, if not a cover-up of these disgracefull events.
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Original:  "The refusal of the U.S. governemnt to conduct a truly independent investigation into the abuses at Abu-Gharib and other dentention centers is tantamount to a white-wash, if not a cover-up of these disgracefull events.
Revised:  "The refusal of the U.S. governemnt to conduct a truly independant investigation into the abuses at Abu-Gharib and other dentention centers is tantamount to a white-wash, if not a cover-up of these disgracefull events.
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Original:  "The refusal of the U.S. governemnt to conduct a truly independent investigation into the abuses at Abu-Gharib and other dentention centers is tantamount to a white-wash, if not a cover-up of these disgracefull events.
Revised:  "The refusal of the U.S. governemnt to conduct a truly independent investigation into the abuses at Abu-Gharib and other dentention centers is tantamount to a white-wash, if not a cover-up of these disgraceful events.
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Original:  It is a failure of leadership to prosecute only enlisted soldiers and a few officers while protecting those who designed a deliberate goverment policy of torture and authorize interregation techniques that constitute torture or cruel and degrading human treatment.
Revised:  It is a failure of leadership to prosecute only enlisted soldiers and a few officers while protecting those who designed a deliberate goverment policy of torture and authorized interregation techniques that constitute torture or cruel and degrading human treatment.
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Original: On Thursday, the 26th , Amnesty International has urged foreign governments to investigate high-level U.S. government officials for human rights violations committed in Afghanistan, Iraq, and Guantanamo Bay, Cuba.
Revised: On Thursday, the 26th , Amnesty International urged foreign governments to investigate high-level U.S. government officials for human rights violations committed in Afghanistan, Iraq, and Guantanamo Bay, Cuba.
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Original:  William Schulz, the executive director of the U.S. branch of Amnesty International, says that governments have an obligation under international law to conduct investigations into alleged human rights violations.
Revised:  William Schulz, the executive director of the U.S. branch of Amnesty International, said that governments have an obligation under international law to conduct investigations into alleged human rights violations.
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Original:  White House Press Secretary Scott McClellan has described recent criticisms of the United States regarding alleged human rights abuses as "unsupported by the facts    .
Revised:  White House Press Secretary Scott McClellan has described recent criticisms of the United States regarding alleged human rights abuses as "unsupported by the facts ." .
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Original:  If the U.S. government continues to shirk their responsibility, Amnesty International calls on foreign government to investigate senior U.S. officials.
Revised:  If the U.S. government continues to shirk their responsibility, Amnesty International calls on foreign governments to investigate senior U.S. officials.
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Original:  Up two 200 passengers and crew are feared dead.
Revised:  Up to 200 passengers and crew are feared dead.
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Original:  The Sudanese head of police Mohammad Najib cited a crash landing due to bad weather as the cause of the accident.
Revised:  The Sudanese head of police , Mohammad Najib, cited a crash landing due to bad weather as the cause of the accident.
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Original:  It had previously been diverted to w: Port Sudan due to heavy rain in Khartoum
Revised:  It had previously been diverted to Port Sudan due to heavy rain in Khartoum
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Original: Judge Peter Zahra , of the Sydney District Court , had earlier lauded the jury's apparent attentiveness and diligence, but following the revelation  he told the forewoman that she and her fellow sudoku players had let down everyone involved in the trial.
Revised: Judge Peter Zahra of the Sydney District Court , had earlier lauded the jury's apparent attentiveness and diligence, but following the revelation he told the forewoman that she and her fellow sudoku players had let down everyone involved in the trial.
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Original: Judge Peter Zahra , of the Sydney District Court , had earlier lauded the jury's apparent attentiveness and diligence, but following the revelation  he told the forewoman that she and her fellow sudoku players had let down everyone involved in the trial.
Revised: Judge Peter Zahra , of the Sydney District Court had earlier lauded the jury's apparent attentiveness and diligence, but following the revelation he told the forewoman that she and her fellow sudoku players had let down everyone involved in the trial.
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Original: Judge Peter Zahra , of the Sydney District Court , had earlier lauded the jury's apparent attentiveness and diligence, but following the revelation  he told the forewoman that she and her fellow sudoku players had let down everyone involved in the trial.
Revised: Judge Peter Zahra , of the Sydney District Court , had earlier lauded the jury's apparent attentiveness and diligence, but following the revelation , he told the forewoman that she and her fellow sudoku players had let down everyone involved in the trial.
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Original:  The New South Wales sheriff's office will update their guidelines to instruct jurors not to play games during proceedings, and the co-accused will be facing a new trial at a later date
Revised:  The New South Wales sheriff's office will update its guidelines to instruct jurors not to play games during proceedings, and the co-accused will be facing a new trial at a later date
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Original:  The co-accused, Holland, made the same observation, and their defence counsel lodged an appeal to the judge.
Revised:  The co-accused, Holland, made the same observation, and their defense counsel lodged an appeal to the judge.
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Original:  The co-accused, Holland, made the same observation, and their defense counsel lodged an appeal to the judge.
Revised:  The co-accused, Holland, made the same observation, and their defence counsel lodged an appeal to the judge.
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Original:  "It helps me keep my mind busy, and pay more attention," she said in her defense .
Revised:  "It helps me keep my mind busy, and pay more attention," she said in her defence .
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Original: The rocket being launched today The Gamma-ray Large Area Space Telescope (GLAST) satellite has been launched aboard a United Launch Alliance Delta II Heavy carrier rocket.
Revised: GLAST launches aboard a Delta II rocket The Gamma-ray Large Area Space Telescope (GLAST) satellite has been launched aboard a United Launch Alliance Delta II Heavy carrier rocket.
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Original: 240px| Left| Another view of the launch The Delta II rocket flew in the 7920H configuration, with nine GEM-46 solid rocket motors, and no third stage.
Revised: 240px| Another view of the launch The Delta II rocket flew in the 7920H configuration, with nine GEM-46 solid rocket motors, and no third stage.
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Original:  Lift-off occurred from Launch Complex 17B at the Cape Canaveral Air Force Station in Florida, United States, at 16:05 GMT. Launch operations are currently ongoing, with spacecraft separation expected about 70 minutes after launch  . So far everything is proceeding nominally.
Revised:  Lift-off occurred from Launch Complex 17B at the Cape Canaveral Air Force Station in Florida, United States, at 16:05 GMT. Launch operations are currently ongoing, with spacecraft separation expected about 70 minutes after launch . 
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Original:  In total, this is the 136th launch of a Delta II, the 134th successful Delta II launch, and the 81th consecutive success
Revised:  In total, this is the 136th launch of a Delta II, the 134th successful Delta II launch, and the 81st consecutive success
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Original:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar as Google I/O, the largest programming event only available in USA, held earlier on May 28 & 29 at San Francisco , California .
Revised:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar as Google I/O, the largest programming event only available in USA, held earlier on May 28 & 29 at San Francisco .
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Original:  Takuya Oikawa, Software Engineer of Google Japan, analyzed the future trend on programming and redefine the basic structure of "3C".
Revised:  Takuya Oikawa, Software Engineer of Google Japan, analyzed the future trend on programming and redefined the "3C".
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Original:  As Fumitoshi Ukai, Software Engineer of Google Japan, to appeal importances on Google App Engine, he did a SWOT analysis with an example of Sichuan Earthquake , and said: "The failure or success of Cloud Computing will be determined by three critical factors - ability of offline computing, language support, and quotas of databases."
Revised:  As Fumitoshi Ukai, Software Engineer of Google Japan, to appeal importances on Google App Engine, he did a SWOT analysis with an example of Sichuan earthquake , and said: "The failure or success of Cloud Computing will be determined by three critical factors - ability of offline computing, language support, and quotas of databases."
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Original:  2008 The 2nd-annual Google Developer Day started its tournament from Pasifico Yokohama, Japan as its first stage.
Revised:  2008 The 2nd-annual Google Developer Day started its tournament in Pasifico Yokohama, Japan as its first stage.
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Original:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar as Google I/O, the largest programming event  only available in USA , held earlier on May 28 & 29 at San Francisco, California.
Revised:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar to Google I/O, the largest programming event only available in USA , held earlier on May 28 & 29 at San Francisco, California.
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Original:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar as Google I/O, the largest programming event  only available in USA , held earlier on May 28 & 29 at San Francisco, California.
Revised:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar as Google I/O, the largest programming event which is only available in USA , held earlier on May 28 & 29 at San Francisco, California.
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Original:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar as Google I/O, the largest programming event  only available in USA , held earlier on May 28 & 29 at San Francisco, California.
Revised:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar as Google I/O, the largest programming event only available in USA and held earlier on May 28 & 29 at San Francisco, California.
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Original:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar as Google I/O, the largest programming event  only available in USA , held earlier on May 28 & 29 at San Francisco, California.
Revised:  According to Google, this programmer-based event is similar as Google I/O, the largest programming event only available in USA , held earlier on May 28 & 29 in San Francisco, California.
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Original: After the Japan Stage, the 2008 Google Developer Day will be held successively at China, Taiwan, Australia, Mexico, and Brazil this June.
Revised: After the Japan Stage, 2008 Google Developer Day will be held successively at China, Taiwan, Australia, Mexico, and Brazil this June.
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Original: After the Japan Stage, the 2008 Google Developer Day will be held successively at China, Taiwan, Australia, Mexico, and Brazil this June.
Revised: After the Japan Stage, the 2008 Google Developer Day will be held in China, Taiwan, Australia, Mexico, and Brazil this June.
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Original: After the Japan Stage, the 2008 Google Developer Day will be held successively at China, Taiwan, Australia, Mexico, and Brazil this June.
Revised: After the Japan Stage, the 2008 Google Developer Day will be held successively at China, Taiwan, Australia, Mexico, and Brazil during the month of June.
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Original:  The Europe Tour of the 2008 Google Developer Day will be kicked off from London, England on September 16
Revised:  The Europe Tour of the 2008 Google Developer Day will kick off from London, England on September 16
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Original: 240px| 2008 Google Developer Day in Japan.
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Original: An EU-US summit held in Slovenia produced a draft declaration outlining the groups' future cooperation on climate change, energy security and financial stability.
Revised: A European Union-United States summit held in Slovenia produced a draft declaration outlining the groups' future cooperation on climate change, energy security and financial stability.
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Original:  The move comes as an indication that the trial of pilot-in-command Captain Marwoto Komar is set to commence within weeks   
Revised:  The move comes as an indication that the trial of pilot-in-command Captain Marwoto Komar is set to commence within weeks . 
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Original:   A number of other criticisms were also leveled at the airport, the airline and transport politicians for contributing factors  
Revised:  A number of other criticisms were also leveled at the airport, the airline and transport politicians for contributing factors . 
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Original:  Much controversy was caused by the suggestion it may be used, since international regulations limit the use of materials intended for safety investiagations as evidence to prove liability in crimminal or civil cases   
Revised:  Much controversy was caused by the suggestion it may be used, since international regulations limit the use of materials intended for safety investiagations as evidence to prove liability in crimminal or civil cases . 
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Original:  His case is considered a landmark, with aviation groups believing his trial may set the precedent for any pilot involved in future accidents  
Revised:  His case is considered a landmark, with aviation groups believing his trial may set the precedent for any pilot involved in future accidents . 
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Original: Police in Indonesia have forwarded a 200 page brief concerning the Garuda Indonesia Flight 200 disaster to prosecutors.
Revised: Police in Indonesia have forwarded a 200-page brief concerning the Garuda Indonesia Flight 200 disaster to prosecutors.
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Original:  The report blamed pilot error for the crash, finding that the airliner had touched down at roughly twice the  safe landing speed, and that Komar was "fixated" on landing and "probably emotionally aroused".
Revised:  The report blamed pilot error for the crash, finding that the airliner had touched down at roughly twice the accepted safe landing speed, and that Komar was "fixated" on landing and "probably emotionally aroused".
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Original:  Much controversy was caused by the suggestion it may be used, since international regulations limit the use of materials intended for safety investiagations as evidence to prove liability in crimminal or civil cases.
Revised:  Much controversy was caused by the suggestion it may be used, since international regulations limit the use of materials intended for safety investigations as evidence to prove liability in crimminal or civil cases.
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