wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Temperature distribution in a lake in summer and winter The unusual density curve and lower density of ice than of water is vital to life —if water were most dense at the freezing point, then in winter the very cold water at the surface of lakes and other water bodies would sink, lakes could freeze from the bottom up, and all life in them would be killed.
Revised:  Temperature distribution in a lake in summer and winter The unusual density curve and lower density of ice than of water is essential for much of the life on earth —if water were most dense at the freezing point, then in winter the very cold water at the surface of lakes and other water bodies would sink, lakes could freeze from the bottom up, and all life in them would be killed.
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Original:  Gilbert Newton Lewis isolated the first sample of pure heavy water in 1933.
Revised:  1) Water is polor and precious. 2) It has high heat capacity. 3) water is less dense as a solid than as liquid 4) water disolves some things. 5) it has no colour,shape,taste and smell.
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Original:  In 1000 AD the peaceful Arawaks lived on the island.
Revised:  By 1000 AD the peaceful Arawaks lived on the island.
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Original:  In 1000 AD the peaceful Arawaks lived on the island.
Revised:  In 1000 AD the peaceful Arawaks were living on the island.
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Original:  And in his history of the Antilles he said, “The most beautiful of all the little isles is Carriacou...” In the 18th century the cotton, sugar and the indigo plantations were established on the island by the English.
Revised:  And in his history of the Antilles he said, “The most beautiful of all the little isles is Carriacou...” In the 18th century , cotton, sugar and the indigo plantations were established on the island by the English.
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Original:  And in his history of the Antilles he said, “The most beautiful of all the little isles is Carriacou...” In the 18th century the cotton, sugar and the indigo plantations were established on the island by the English.
Revised:  And in his history of the Antilles he said, “The most beautiful of all the little isles is Carriacou...” In the 18th century the cotton, sugar and indigo plantations were established on the island by the English.
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Original:  In the 18th century the supply area with water channel were established and used to direct rain water from the hills for agriculture.
Revised:  They also built water channels which brought water from the hills for agriculture.
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Original:  In the 18th century the supply area with water channel were established and used to direct rain water from the hills for agriculture.
Revised:  In the 18th century the supply area with water channel were established and used to direct rain water from the hills for use in irrigation.
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Original:  In 1720,  Bartholomew Roberts captured a French ship near Carriacou and commandeered it, renaming it Royal Fortune.
Revised:  In 1720, the pirate Bartholomew Roberts captured a French ship near Carriacou and commandeered it, renaming it Royal Fortune.
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Original:  In 1750, the first census of the island was conducted , and there were 199 people ( 92 Whites , 92 Blacks and 15 Mulattos) living in Carriacou .
Revised:  In 1750, the first census of the island was conducted . There were 199 people ( 92 Whites , 92 Blacks and 15 Mulattos) living in Carriacou .
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Original:  In 1750, the first census of the island was conducted , and there were 199 people ( 92 Whites , 92 Blacks and 15 Mulattos) living in Carriacou .
Revised:  In 1750, the first census of the island was conducted , and there were 199 people ( 92 whites , 92 Blacks and 15 Mulattos) living in Carriacou .
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Original:  In 1750, the first census of the island was conducted , and there were 199 people ( 92 Whites , 92 Blacks and 15 Mulattos) living in Carriacou .
Revised:  In 1750, the first census of the island was conducted , and there were 199 people ( 92 Whites , 92 blacks and 15 Mulattos) living in Carriacou .
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Original:  In 1750, the first census of the island was conducted , and there were 199 people ( 92 Whites , 92 Blacks and 15 Mulattos) living in Carriacou .
Revised:  In 1750, the first census of the island was conducted , and there were 199 people ( 92 Whites , 92 Blacks and 15 mulattos .
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Original:  Became part of the colonies of Grenada In 1763 Carriacou was ceded with Grenada to the British (United Kingdom) .
Revised:  British Empire In 1763 Carriacou was ceded with Grenada to the British (United Kingdom) .
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Original:  On the 22 June 1770, Captain John Urquhart bought Grand Anse Estate Plantation on the Mortgage .
Revised:  On the 22 June 1770, Captain John Urquhart bought Grand Anse Estate Plantation .
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Original:  In 1776, the island population was 3,239 (86 Whites and 3,153 slaves) people, not counting the free Blacks and the free Mulattos.
Revised:  In 1776, the island population was 3,239 (86 whites and 3,153 slaves) people, not counting the free Blacks and the free Mulattos.
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Original:  In 1776, the island population was 3,239 (86 Whites and 3,153 slaves) people, not counting the free Blacks and the free Mulattos.
Revised:  In 1776, the island population was 3,239 (86 Whites and 3,153 slaves) people, not counting the free blacks and the free Mulattos.
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Original:  In 1776, the island population was 3,239 (86 Whites and 3,153 slaves) people, not counting the free Blacks and the free Mulattos.
Revised:  In 1776, the island population was 3,239 (86 Whites and 3,153 slaves) people, not counting the free Blacks and the free mulattos.
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Original:  In 1783–1793 the Glebe land belonged to the Priest .
Revised:  Between 1783–1793 the Glebe land belonged to the Priest .
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Original:  In 1783–1793 the Glebe land belonged to the Priest .
Revised:  In 1783–1793 it was established that the glebe land belonged to the Priest .
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Original:  In 1783–1793 the Glebe land belonged to the Priest .
Revised:  In 1783–1793 the Glebe land belonged to the priest .
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Original:  In 1788  Craigston and Meldrum Estates were the property of William Urquhart of Craigston.
Revised:  In 1788 the Craigston and Meldrum Estates were the property of William Urquhart of Craigston.
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Original:  The Glebe land was the land of Parson in 1793.
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Original:  In 1793 the Craigston, Meldrum and Prospect estate was the fourth largestlandholder on the island of Carriacou .
Revised:  In 1793 the Craigston, Meldrum and Prospect estates were the largest .
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Original:  In 1796 there were more sailing vessels in Hillsborough Bay when Sir Ralph Abercromby met there to launch an attack on the Spanish.
Revised:  In 1796 there were a large number of sailing vessels in Hillsborough Bay when Sir Ralph Abercromby met there to launch an attack on the Spanish.
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Original:  In 1769–1815 the Craigston estate was a cotton plantation.
Revised:  In 1769–1815 the Craigston estate became a cotton plantation.
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Original:  In 1891 a few wells were sunk below ground water.
Revised:  In 1891 a few wells were sunk to find ground water.
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Original:  In 1902 the Harvey Vale was divided into 244 lots. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1920 limes were also grown on Carriacou until the turn of the 20th century, but the production was less than the yields so many of the groves were abandoned and  transferred to Grenada where lime production was profitable .
Revised:  In 1902 the Harvey Vale was divided into 244 lots. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1920 limes were grown commercially on Carriacou until the turn of the 20th century, but the production was less than the yields so many of the groves were abandoned and transferred to Grenada where lime production was profitable .
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Original:  In 1902 the Harvey Vale was divided into 244 lots. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1920 limes were also grown on Carriacou until the turn of the 20th century, but the production was less than the yields so many of the groves were abandoned and  transferred to Grenada where lime production was profitable .
Revised:  In 1902 the Harvey Vale was divided into 244 lots. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1920 limes were also grown on Carriacou until the turn of the 20th century, but they became unprofitable so many of the groves were abandoned and transferred to Grenada where lime production was profitable .
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Original:  In 1902 the Harvey Vale was divided into 244 lots. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1920 limes were also grown on Carriacou until the turn of the 20th century, but the production was less than the yields so many of the groves were abandoned and  transferred to Grenada where lime production was profitable .
Revised:  In 1902 the Harvey Vale was divided into 244 lots. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1920 limes were also grown on Carriacou until the turn of the 20th century, but the production was less than the yields so many of the groves were abandoned and production was transferred to Grenada where lime production was profitable .
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Original:  In 1902 the Harvey Vale was divided into 244 lots. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1920 limes were also grown on Carriacou until the turn of the 20th century, but the production was less than the yields so many of the groves were abandoned and  transferred to Grenada where lime production was profitable .
Revised:  In 1902 the Harvey Vale was divided into 244 lots. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1920 limes were also grown on Carriacou until the turn of the 20th century, but the production was less than the yields so many of the groves were abandoned and transferred to Grenada .
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Original:  The Jehovah’s Witnesses were established on the island in 1951 ;
Revised:  The Jehovah’s Witnesses were established on the island in 1951 and the
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Original:  In 1965, the Carriacou Regatta began .
Revised:  In 1965, the Carriacou Regatta was first held .
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Original:  In 1968 Lauriston airport/airstrip was opened.
Revised:  In 1968 , Lauriston airport was opened.
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Original:  Grenada becomes an independent nation  On October 31, 1975  Carriacou Carib Organization (Big Drum Dance Organization) began .
Revised:  Independance On October 31, 1975 Carriacou Carib Organization (Big Drum Dance Organization) began .
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Original:  Grenada becomes an independent nation  On October 31, 1975  Carriacou Carib Organization (Big Drum Dance Organization) began .
Revised:  Grenada becomes an independent nation On October 31, 1975 the Carriacou Carib Organization (Big Drum Dance Organization) began .
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Original:  Grenada becomes an independent nation  On October 31, 1975  Carriacou Carib Organization (Big Drum Dance Organization) began .
Revised:  Grenada becomes an independent nation On October 31, 1975 Carriacou Carib Organization (Big Drum Dance Organization) was started .
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Original:  The lime factory (Craigston Great House) is the most historical landmark and was in operation up to 1981.
Revised:  The lime factory (Craigston Great House) is the most historical landmark and was in operation until 1981.
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Original:  In 1983 Nicholas Brathwaite became the first Prime Minister of Grenada from Carriacou.
Revised:  In 1983 Nicholas Brathwaite became the first Prime Minister of Grenada to have originated in Carriacou.
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Original:  In 1999 Hurricane Lenny damaged Carriacou .
Revised:  In 1999 Hurricane Lenny caused considerable damage to the island .
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Original:  In 2001 the reconstruction of the major commercial road network island-wide was undertaken.
Revised:  In 2001 a reconstruction of the major commercial road network island-wide was undertaken.
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Original:  In 2005 Hurricane Emily made strong winds and heavy rainfall on the island of Carriacou .
Revised:  In 2005 Hurricane Emily caused strong winds and heavy rainfall on the island of Carriacou .
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Original:  In 2005 Hurricane Emily made strong winds and heavy rainfall on the island of Carriacou .
Revised:  In 2005 Hurricane Emily made strong winds and heavy rainfall on the island .
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Original:  On Tuesday, 27 May 2008 the New National Party (NNP) Grenada make the largest gathering in Carriacou history at the Digg Playing Field in Harvey Vale and there were 7,000 people (green clad) held at this event.
Revised:  On Tuesday, 27 May 2008 the New National Party (NNP) Grenada organised the largest gathering in Carriacou history at the Digg Playing Field in Harvey Vale and there were 7,000 people (green clad) held at this event.
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Original:  On Tuesday, 27 May 2008 the New National Party (NNP) Grenada make the largest gathering in Carriacou history at the Digg Playing Field in Harvey Vale and there were 7,000 people (green clad) held at this event.
Revised:  On Tuesday, 27 May 2008 the New National Party (NNP) Grenada make the largest gathering in Carriacou history at the Digg Playing Field in Harvey Vale and there were 7,000 people (green clad) at the event.
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Original:   In 1968, Lauriston airport was opened.
Revised:  The island was nearly sold to the Catholic Church as a place for paedophile priests to pray and ask for penance, where they could be contained from the main population as the problem was so wide spread. A $5000 deposit for this was paid. In 1968, Lauriston airport was opened.
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Original:  In 2008 Rawle Paterson was the first Carriacouan and Caribbean person to receive a top award at a Chinese University (the university he went to was University of China, Beijing, China, Asia. ) On Tuesday, 27 May 2008 the New National Party (NNP) Grenada organised the largest gathering in Carriacou history at the Digg Playing Field in Harvey Vale and there were 7,000 people (green clad) at the event.
Revised:  In 2008 Rawle Paterson was the first Carriacouan and Caribbean person to receive a top award at a Chinese university (the university he went to was University of China, Beijing, China, Asia. ) On Tuesday, 27 May 2008 the New National Party (NNP) Grenada organised the largest gathering in Carriacou history at the Digg Playing Field in Harvey Vale and there were 7,000 people (green clad) at the event.
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Original:  In 2008 Rawle Paterson was the first Carriacouan and Caribbean person to receive a top award at a Chinese University (the university he went to was University of China, Beijing, China, Asia. ) On Tuesday, 27 May 2008 the New National Party (NNP) Grenada organised the largest gathering in Carriacou history at the Digg Playing Field in Harvey Vale and there were 7,000 people (green clad) at the event.
Revised:  In 2008 Rawle Paterson was the first Carriacouan and Caribbean person to receive a top award at a Chinese University (the university he attended was the in Beijing ) On Tuesday, 27 May 2008 the New National Party (NNP) Grenada organised the largest gathering in Carriacou history at the Digg Playing Field in Harvey Vale and there were 7,000 people (green clad) at the event.
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Original: The Anyanya one movement, although relatively strong, was weakened by the internal political wrangling amongst the leading politicians of the liberation movement.
Revised: The Anyanya movement, although relatively strong, was weakened by the internal political wrangling amongst the leading politicians of the liberation movement.
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Original:  After Amin had overthrown Obote and assumed the Ugandan presidency in 1971, he recruitedeven more ex-Anyanya into the Uganda Army, as he regarded them as loyal to his government.
Revised:  After Amin had overthrown Obote and assumed the Ugandan presidency in 1971, he recruited even more ex-Anyanya into the Uganda Army, as he regarded them as loyal to his government.
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Original:  The old Ancon remained in Panama Canal service as Ex Ancon until sold private .
Revised:  The old Ancon remained in Panama Canal service as Ex Ancon until sold privately .
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Original:  Repertoire ( or ) refers to a list or set of dramas, operas, musical compositions or roles which a company or person is prepared to perform.
Revised:  A repertoire ( or ) refers to a list or set of dramas, operas, musical compositions or roles which a company or person is prepared to perform.
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Original:  Repertoire ( or ) refers to a list or set of dramas, operas, musical compositions or roles which a company or person is prepared to perform.
Revised:  Repertoire ( or ) is a list or set of dramas, operas, musical compositions or roles which a company or person is prepared to perform.
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Original:  "Repertoire - Definition and More", Free Merriam-Webster, 2012, web: MW. The term has been widely used by musicians to refer to a musical repertoire .
Revised:  "Repertoire - Definition and More", Free Merriam-Webster, 2012, web: MW. Musicians often have a musical repertoire .
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Original:  Origin The first known use of the word "repertoire" was in 1847.
Revised:  The first known use of the word "repertoire" was in 1847.
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Original:  Cultural influences The concept of a basic repertoire has been extended to refer to groups which focus mainly on performing standard works, as in repertory theater or repertoire ballet.
Revised:  The concept of a basic repertoire has been extended to refer to groups which focus mainly on performing standard works, as in repertory theater or repertoire ballet.
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Original:  A repertoire ( or ) is a list or set of dramas, operas, musical compositions or roles which a company or person is prepared to perform.
Revised:  A repertoire ( ) is a list or set of dramas, operas, musical compositions or roles which a company or person is prepared to perform.
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Original: '' Also see : Repertory theater or Repertoire (disambiguation).
Revised: '' See also : Repertory theater or Repertoire (disambiguation).
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Original: See also: Repertory theater or Repertoire (disambiguation).
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Original:  This word, in turn, has its origin in the Late Latin word repertorium '' .
Revised:  This word, in turn, has its origin in the Late Latin word repertorium .
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Original:  It is a loan word from the French language, as , with a similar meaning in the arts.
Revised:  It is a loanword from the French language, as , with a similar meaning in the arts.
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Original:  "Repertoire - Definition and More", Free Merriam-Webster, 2012, web: MW. Musicians often have a musical repertoire.
Revised:  Musicians often have a musical repertoire.
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Original:  It is a loanword from the French language, as  , with a similar meaning in the arts.
Revised:  It is a loanword from the French language, as () , with a similar meaning in the arts.
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Original:  The concept of a basic repertoire has been extended to refer to groups which focus mainly on performing standard works, as in repertory theater or repertoire ballet . "American Ballet Theatre - Repertory Archive", ABT.org, 2010, webpage: ABT
Revised:  The concept of a basic repertoire has been extended to refer to groups which focus mainly on performing standard works, as in repertory theater or repertoire ballet 
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Original: To 1800 Merry company , by Dirck Hals The Low Countries dominated the field until the 18th century, and in the 17th century both Flemish Baroque painting and Dutch Golden Age painting produced numerous specialists who mostly painted genre scenes.
Revised: To 1800 Merry Company , by Dirck Hals The Low Countries dominated the field until the 18th century, and in the 17th century both Flemish Baroque painting and Dutch Golden Age painting produced numerous specialists who mostly painted genre scenes.
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Original:  Often the subject of a genre painting was based on a popular emblem from an Emblem book.
Revised:  Often the subject of a genre painting was based on a popular emblem from an emblem book.
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Original:  housemaid troubles were the subject of several of Nicolaes Maes' works  ]]
Revised:  housemaid troubles were the subject of several of Nicolaes Maes' works . ]]
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Original:  If they are to be taken, the preferred choices are benzodiazepines with short-lasting effects such as  temazepam or the newer Z-medicines such as zopiclone.
Revised:  If they are to be taken, the preferred choices are benzodiazepines with short-lasting effects such as URL temazepam or the newer Z-medicines such as zopiclone.
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Original:  The herb valerian can also be effective in gently inducing a relaxed state which is conducive to sleep. 
Revised:  The herb valerian can also be effective in gently inducing a relaxed state which is conducive to sleep. Therefore this means that
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Original:  It may also simulate REM sleep , tiring people's eyes .
Revised:  It may also simulate REM sleep .
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Original:   A systematic review and meta-analysis of 17 different studies found that taking a warm bath  or shower 1–2 hours before bedtime for as little as 10 minutes  shortens the sleep onset time and improves sleep efficiency and subjective sleep quality and increases the amount of deep sleep.
Revised:  A systematic review and meta-analysis of 17 different studies found that taking a warm bath , or shower 1–2 hours before bedtime for as little as 10 minutes shortens the sleep onset time and improves sleep efficiency and subjective sleep quality and increases the amount of deep sleep.
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Original:   A systematic review and meta-analysis of 17 different studies found that taking a warm bath  or shower 1–2 hours before bedtime for as little as 10 minutes  shortens the sleep onset time and improves sleep efficiency and subjective sleep quality and increases the amount of deep sleep.
Revised:  A systematic review and meta-analysis of 17 different studies found that taking a warm bath or shower 1–2 hours before bedtime for as little as 10 minutes , shortens the sleep onset time and improves sleep efficiency and subjective sleep quality and increases the amount of deep sleep.
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Original:   A systematic review and meta-analysis of 17 different studies found that taking a warm bath  or shower 1–2 hours before bedtime for as little as 10 minutes  shortens the sleep onset time and improves sleep efficiency and subjective sleep quality and increases the amount of deep sleep.
Revised:  A systematic review and meta-analysis of 17 different studies found that taking a warm bath or shower 1–2 hours before bedtime for as little as 10 minutes shortens the sleep onset time and improves sleep efficiency . It also improves subjective sleep quality and increases the amount of deep sleep.
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Original:  Hypnotics, sometimes referred to as sleeping pills, may be prescribed by a physician, but their long-term efficacy is poor and they have numerous adverse effects  including daytime drowsiness, accidents, memory disorders and withdrawal symptoms.
Revised:  Hypnotics, sometimes referred to as sleeping pills, may be prescribed by a physician, but their long-term efficacy is poor and they have numerous adverse effects , including daytime drowsiness, accidents, memory disorders and withdrawal symptoms.
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Original:  Nonprescription medications A number of nonprescription medications have shown to be effective in promoting sleep.
Revised:  Non-prescription medications A number of nonprescription medications have shown to be effective in promoting sleep.
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