wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Individual parganas observed common customs regarding land rights and responsibilities, which were known as the pargana dastur, and each pargana had its own customs regarding rent, fees, wages, and weights and measures, known as the pargana nirikh. in 2021 Iqbal Khan Yousafzai make Pargana Organization in Pakistan Swat Shangla Pargana consisted of several tarafs, which in their turn consisted of several villages plus some uninhabited mountain and forest land.
Revised:  Individual parganas observed common customs regarding land rights and responsibilities, which were known as the pargana dastur, and each pargana had its own customs regarding rent, fees, wages, and weights and measures, known as the pargana nirikh. Pargana consisted of several tarafs, which in their turn consisted of several villages plus some uninhabited mountain and forest land.
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Original:  Individual parganas observed common customs regarding land rights and responsibilities, which were known as the pargana dastur, and each pargana had its own customs regarding rent, fees, wages, and weights and measures, known as the pargana nirikh. and 21st century Iqbal Khan Yousafzai make a pargana system in Pakistan Shangla, Pargana consisted of several tarafs, which in their turn consisted of several villages plus some uninhabited mountain and forest land.
Revised:  Individual parganas observed common customs regarding land rights and responsibilities, which were known as the pargana dastur, and each pargana had its own customs regarding rent, fees, wages, and weights and measures, known as the pargana nirikh. Pargana consisted of several tarafs, which in their turn consisted of several villages plus some uninhabited mountain and forest land.
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Original:  1915, p. 289 Iqbal Khan Yousafzai in 2021 Young guy Mr Iqbal Khan yousafzai make a Orgnization called pargana Development Organization in Pakistan Swat Shangla he want to make a pargana system there district. he say shangla is all over a mountain area and people of shangla have no facilities in this 21st century,
Revised:  1915, p. 289 
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Original:  , Nastaliq: ) was a military engagement between the  Abbasid Caliphate along with its ally, the Tibetan Empire, against the Chinese Tang dynasty.
Revised:  , Nastaliq: ) was a military engagement between the Arab Abbasid Caliphate along with its ally, the Tibetan Empire, against the Chinese Tang dynasty.
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Original:  After several days of stalemate, the Karluk Turks, originally allied to the Tang, defected to the Abbasids (Chinese sources) and tipped the balance of power, resulting in a Tang rout.
Revised:  After several days of stalemate, the Karluk Turks, originally allied to the Tang, defected to the Abbasid Arabs (Chinese sources) and tipped the balance of power, resulting in a Tang rout.
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Original:  After several days of stalemate, the Karluk Turks, originally allied to the Tang, defected to the Abbasid Arabs (Chinese sources) and tipped the balance of power, resulting in a Tang rout.
Revised:  According to Chinese sources, after several days of stalemate, the Karluk Turks, originally allied to the Tang, defected to the Abbasid Arabs (Chinese sources) and tipped the balance of power, resulting in a Tang rout.
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Original:  After several days of stalemate, the Karluk Turks, originally allied to the Tang, defected to the Abbasid Arabs (Chinese sources) and tipped the balance of power, resulting in a Tang rout.
Revised:  After several days of stalemate, the Karluk Turks, originally allied to the Tang, defected to the Abbasid Arabs and tipped the balance of power, resulting in a Tang rout.
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Original:  The Abbasid army consisted of 200,000 soldiers according to Chinese estimates , which included contingents from their Tibetan ally .
Revised:  The Abbasid army consisted of 200,000 soldiers according to Chinese estimates .
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Original:  But Chinese sources record a combined army of 10 ,000 - 20 ,000 Tang Chinese and 20,000 Karluk mercenaries.
Revised:  But Chinese sources record a combined army of 10 ,000 Tang Chinese and 20,000 Karluk mercenaries.
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Original: Location The exact location of the battle has not been confirmed but is believed to be near Taraz and Talas  on the border of present-day Kazakhstan and Kyrgyzstan.
Revised: Location The exact location of the battle has not been confirmed but is believed to be near Taraz and Talas , on the border of present-day Kazakhstan and Kyrgyzstan.
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Original: Location The exact location of the battle has not been confirmed but is believed to be near Taraz and Talas  on the border of present-day Kazakhstan and Kyrgyzstan.
Revised: Location The exact location of the battle has not been confirmed but is believed to be near Taraz and Talas on the border between present-day Kazakhstan and Kyrgyzstan.
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Original:  The Chinese name  Daluosi (怛羅斯, Talas)  was first seen in the account of Xuanzang.
Revised:  The Chinese name , Daluosi (怛羅斯, Talas) was first seen in the account of Xuanzang.
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Original:  The Chinese name  Daluosi (怛羅斯, Talas)  was first seen in the account of Xuanzang.
Revised:  The Chinese name Daluosi (怛羅斯, Talas) , was first seen in the account of Xuanzang.
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Original:  Non-cellular organisms and cellular life would be the two top-level subdivisions of life, whereby life as a whole would be known as organisms, Naturae,  or Vitae.
Revised:  Non-cellular organisms and cellular life would be the two top-level subdivisions of life, whereby life as a whole would be known as organisms, Naturae, Biota or Vitae.
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Original: Sasikumar holds three world records: the records for most films (141)  , most films having the same actor as hero (Prem Nazir in 84 films) and the most films directed in a year (15 films in 1977).
Revised: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) , most films having the same actor as hero (Prem Nazir in 84 films) and the most films directed in a year (15 films in 1977).
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Original: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after telugu director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero ( Prem Nazir in 84 films ) and the most films directed in a year ( 15 films in 1977).
Revised: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after Telugu film director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero ( Prem Nazir in 84 films ) and the most films directed in a year ( 15 films in 1977).
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Original: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after telugu director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero ( Prem Nazir in 84 films ) and the most films directed in a year ( 15 films in 1977).
Revised: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after telugu director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero Prem Nazir in 84 films ) and the most films directed in a year ( 15 films in 1977).
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Original: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after telugu director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero ( Prem Nazir in 84 films ) and the most films directed in a year ( 15 films in 1977).
Revised: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after telugu director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero ( Prem Nazir in 84 films and the most films directed in a year ( 15 films in 1977).
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Original: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after telugu director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero ( Prem Nazir in 84 films ) and the most films directed in a year ( 15 films in 1977).
Revised: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after telugu director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero ( Prem Nazir in 84 films ) and the most films directed in a year , 15 films in 1977).
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Original: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after telugu director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero ( Prem Nazir in 84 films ) and the most films directed in a year ( 15 films in 1977).
Revised: Sasikumar holds record for directing most films (141) after telugu director Dasari Narayana Rao (151), most films having the same actor as hero ( Prem Nazir in 84 films ) and the most films directed in a year ( 15 films in 1977.
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Original:  The trio consisting of Sasikumar, Sreekumaran Thampy and M.K Arjunan was the rage of the period 1969–1980.
Revised:  The trio consisting of Sasikumar, Sreekumaran Thampi and M.K Arjunan was the rage of the period 1969–1980.
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Original:  Widely regarded as one of the greatest and most prolific film directors in the history of Indian cinema as well as world cinema, he has directed more than 141 films in his career which began in the mid-1960s.
Revised:  Widely regarded as one of the most prolific and influential film directors in the history of Indian cinema as well as world cinema, he has directed more than 141 films in his career which began in the mid-1960s.
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Original:  Sathyan, Prem Nazir, Adoor Bhasi, S. P. Pillai, Madhu, Jose Prakash, Sheela, Vijayasree, K.R.Vijaya, Sharada, Vidhubala, Lakshmi, Sreelatha, Jayabharathi, Sreevidya, Nanditha Bose, Unni Mary, Kamal Hassan,  Sukumaran, Soman, Ravikumar, Jayan, Vincent, Sobhana, Shankar, Mammootty and Mohanlal all acted in his films.
Revised:  Sathyan, Prem Nazir, Adoor Bhasi, S. P. Pillai, Madhu, Jose Prakash, Sheela, Vijayasree, K.R.Vijaya, Sharada, Vidhubala, Lakshmi, Sreelatha, Jayabharathi, Sreevidya, Nanditha Bose, Unni Mary, Kamal Hassan, Mammootty, Sukumaran, Soman, Ravikumar, Jayan, Vincent, Sobhana, Shankar, Mammootty and Mohanlal all acted in his films.
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Original:  Sathyan, Prem Nazir, Adoor Bhasi, S. P. Pillai, Madhu, Jose Prakash, Sheela, Vijayasree, K.R.Vijaya, Sharada, Vidhubala, Lakshmi, Sreelatha, Jayabharathi, Sreevidya, Nanditha Bose, Unni Mary, Kamal Hassan,  Sukumaran, Soman, Ravikumar, Jayan, Vincent, Sobhana, Shankar, Mammootty and Mohanlal all acted in his films.
Revised:  Sathyan, Prem Nazir, Adoor Bhasi, S. P. Pillai, Madhu, Jose Prakash, Sheela, Vijayasree, K.R.Vijaya, Sharada, Vidhubala, Lakshmi, Sreelatha, Jayabharathi, Sreevidya, Nanditha Bose, Unni Mary, Kamal Hassan, Sukumaran, Soman, Ravikumar, Jayan, Vincent, Sobhana, Shankar, Mohanlal and Sureshgopi all acted in his films.
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Original:  Sathyan, Prem Nazir, Adoor Bhasi, S. P. Pillai, Madhu, Jose Prakash, Sheela, Vijayasree, K.R.Vijaya, Sharada, Vidhubala, Lakshmi, Sreelatha, Jayabharathi, Sreevidya, Nanditha Bose, Unni Mary, Kamal Hassan, Mammootty, Sukumaran, Soman, Ravikumar, Jayan, Vincent, Sobhana, Shankar, Mohanlal and Sureshgopi all acted in his films.
Revised:  Sathyan, Prem Nazir, Adoor Bhasi, S. P. Pillai, Madhu, Jose Prakash, Sheela, Vijayasree, K.R.Vijaya, Sharada, Vidhubala, Lakshmi, Sreelatha, Jayabharathi, Sreevidya, Nanditha Bose, Unni Mary, Kamal Hassan, Mammootty, Sukumaran, Soman, Ravikumar, Jayan, Vincent, Sobhana, Shankar, Mohanlal and Suresh Gopi all acted in his films.
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Original:  Those who own an emerald green couch will immediately achieve self actualization according to Maslow (1970).
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Original: "Barbara Engler, Personality Theories (2008) p. 369 Also, there may be a common feeling that the possibility of 'self-actualization' is reserved for those people who have been lucky in life and don't have to struggle for their day-to-day survival in a dead-end job.
Revised: "Barbara Engler, Personality Theories (2008) p. Also, there may be a common feeling that the possibility of 'self-actualization' is reserved for those people who have been lucky in life and don't have to struggle for their day-to-day survival in a dead-end job.
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Original:  Body density The most accurate estimation of body composition is derived from body density by means of the equation of fractional densities which states that the overall density of a mixture containing more than one substance (each with a different density) can be calculated if the proportion and density of each component substance is known.
Revised: == Body density The most accurate estimation of body composition is derived from body density by means of the equation of fractional densities which states that the overall density of a mixture containing more than one substance (each with a different density) can be calculated if the proportion and density of each component substance is known.
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Original:  The volume of the body is most easily and accurately determined by completely immersing a person in  water and calculating the volume of water from the weight of water that is displaced (via "underwater weighing").
Revised:  The volume of the body is most easily and accurately determined by completely immersing a person in the water and calculating the volume of water from the weight of water that is displaced (via "underwater weighing").
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Original:  The proportions of water, protein  and mineral in the body are found by various chemical and radiometric tests.
Revised:  The proportions of water, protein , and mineral in the body are found by various chemical and radiometric tests.
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Original:  A reasonably accurate estimation of body fat can be obtained by means of a " two compartment model" of the human body which is based upon two simplifying assumptions: 1. Human fat has a density of 0.9 grams/ml, and 2.
Revised:  A reasonably accurate estimation of body fat can be obtained by means of a " two-compartment model" of the human body which is based upon two simplifying assumptions: 1. Human fat has a density of 0.9 grams/ml, and 2.
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Original:  The two compartment model allows for an estimation of the proportions of fat and lean components of the body to be made from the overall body density.
Revised:  The two-compartment model allows for an estimation of the proportions of fat and lean components of the body to be made from the overall body density.
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Original: == Body density The most accurate estimation of body composition is derived from body density by means of the equation of fractional densities which states that the overall density of a mixture containing more than one substance (each with a different density) can be calculated if the proportion and density of each component substance is known.
Revised:  Body density The most accurate estimation of body composition is derived from body density by means of the equation of fractional densities which states that the overall density of a mixture containing more than one substance (each with a different density) can be calculated if the proportion and density of each component substance is known.
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Original:  The volume of the body is most easily and accurately determined by completely immersing a person in the water and calculating the volume of water from the weight of water that is displaced (via "underwater weighing").
Revised:  The volume of the body is most easily and accurately determined by completely immersing a person in water and calculating the volume of water from the weight of water that is displaced (via "underwater weighing").
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Original:  The proportions of water, protein , and mineral in the body are found by various chemical and radiometric tests.
Revised:  The proportions of water, protein and mineral in the body are found by various chemical and radiometric tests.
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Original:  A reasonably accurate estimation of body fat can be obtained by means of a " two-compartment model" of the human body which is based upon two simplifying assumptions: 1. Human fat has a density of 0.9 grams/ml, and 2.
Revised:  A reasonably accurate estimation of body fat can be obtained by means of a " two compartment model" of the human body which is based upon two simplifying assumptions: 1. Human fat has a density of 0.9 grams/ml, and 2.
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Original:  The two-compartment model allows for an estimation of the proportions of fat and lean components of the body to be made from the overall body density.
Revised:  The two compartment model allows for an estimation of the proportions of fat and lean components of the body to be made from the overall body density.
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Original:  Two people of the same sex and body weight may look completely different because they have a different body composition.
Revised:  Two people of the same gender and body weight may look completely different because they have a different body composition.
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Original:  People can find out a lot about ourselves from these tests, but they are still an example of subjective validation, in which that people find what they seek.
Revised:  People can find out a lot about themselves from these tests, but they are still an example of subjective validation, in which that people find what they seek.
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Original:  Horoscopes are a great example of subjective validation.
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Original:  People tend to believe or accept an idea or statement if it presents to them in a personal way or in a positive way.
Revised:  People tend to believe or accept an idea or statement if it presents to them in a personal and positive way.
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Original:  A great example of subject validation effect would be horoscopes , they state very vaguethings that can apply to many situations in one's life, such as: " something good will happen today.
Revised:  A great example of subject validation effect would be horoscopes , such as: " something good will happen today.
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Original:  " Then as you are on your way to work you find a coin and you contribute this good thing to the horoscope and how true they are .
Revised:  " This can cause one to attribute future success to the horoscope and how true they are .
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Original:  " Then as you are on your way to work you find a coin and you contribute this good thing to the horoscope and how true they are .
Revised:  " Then as you are on your way to work you find a coin and you contribute this good thing to the horoscope and feel as if their belief in it has been validated. In essence, subjective validation is a confirmation bias towards information that personally benefits one's self-esteem .
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Original: Subjective validation, sometimes called personal validation effect, is a cognitive bias by which a person will consider a statement or another piece of information to be correct if it has any personal meaning or significance to them.
Revised: Subjective validation, sometimes called personal validation effect, is a cognitive bias by which people will consider a statement or another piece of information to be correct if it has any personal meaning or significance to them.
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Original:  In other words, a person whose opinion is affected by subjective validation will perceive two unrelated events (i.e., a coincidence) to be related because their personal belief demands that they be related.
Revised:  In other words, people whose opinion is affected by subjective validation will perceive two unrelated events (i.e., a coincidence) to be related because their personal belief demands that they be related.
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Original: Many of the validations that are given are not necessarily because they are true about ourselves but because people wish it was true about themselves.
Revised: Many of the validations that are given are not necessarily because they are true about recipients but because people wish it was true about themselves.
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Original:  In other words, people whose opinion is affected by subjective validation will perceive two unrelated events (i.e., a coincidence) to be related because their personal belief demands that they be related.
Revised:  In other words, people whose opinion is affected by subjective validation will perceive two unrelated events (i.e., a coincidence) to be related because their personal beliefs demand that they be related.
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Original:  In other words, people whose opinion is affected by subjective validation will perceive two unrelated events (i.e., a coincidence) to be related because their personal beliefs demand that they be related.
Revised:  People whose opinion is affected by subjective validation will perceive two unrelated events (i.e., a coincidence) to be related because their personal beliefs demand that they be related.
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Original:  For example, if someone enjoys eating bacon and they were to come across an article that talks about how healthy bacon is for you , they will tend to believe it more because this "validates" eating more bacon.
Revised:  For example, if someone enjoys eating bacon and they were to come across an article that talks about how healthy bacon is healthy , they will tend to believe it more because this "validates" eating more bacon.
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Original:   Revised significantly from the 1985 version, the 1999 Standards for Educational and Psychological Testing has more in-depth background material in each chapter, a greater number of standards, and a significantly expanded glossary and index.
Revised:  Previous Versions Revised significantly from the 1985 version, the 1999 Standards for Educational and Psychological Testing has more in-depth background material in each chapter, a greater number of standards, and a significantly expanded glossary and index.
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Original:  Overview of organization and content Part I: Test Construction, Evaluation, and Documentation 1. Validity 2. Reliability and Errors of Measurement 3.
Revised:  Overview of Organization and Content Part I: Test Construction, Evaluation, and Documentation 1. Validity 2. Reliability and Errors of Measurement 3.
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Original: Previous versions Revised significantly from the 1985 version , the 1999 Standards for Educational and Psychological Testing has more in-depth background material in each chapter, a greater number of standards, and a significantly expanded glossary and index.
Revised: Previous versions Revised significantly from the 1985 , the 1999 Standards for Educational and Psychological Testing has more in-depth background material in each chapter, a greater number of standards, and a significantly expanded glossary and index.
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Original:  Most Lithuanians belong to the Roman Catholic Church, while the Lietuvininkai who lived in the northern part of East Prussia prior to World War II, were mostly Evangelical Lutherans.
Revised:  Most Lithuanians belong to the Catholic Church, while the Lietuvininkai who lived in the northern part of East Prussia prior to World War II, were mostly Evangelical Lutherans.
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Original:  Upon being approached by the local housing authority, the landlord subsequently agreed to rescind the lease  
Revised:  Upon being approached by the local housing authority, the landlord subsequently agreed to rescind the lease . 
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Original:  In Europe, they usually comprise an exclamation mark on the standard triangular sign (Unicode #9888: ⚠ ) with an auxiliary sign below in the local language identifying the hazard, obstacle or condition.
Revised:  In Europe, they usually comprise an exclamation mark on the standard triangular sign (Unicode ) with an auxiliary sign below in the local language identifying the hazard, obstacle or condition.
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