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Original:  Many actors believe that such warm-ups and exercises reduce the likelihood of vocal abuse , most especially during expression of high intensity emotion outdoors or in a large house in the absence of electronic amplification .
Revised:  Many actors believe that such warm-ups and exercises reduce the likelihood of vocal abuse , most especially during expression of high intensity emotion outdoors or in a large performing venue in the absence of electronic amplification .
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Original:  A dialect coach may also be engaged to coach voice  in this latter sense in conjunction with theatrical dialect coaching.
Revised:  A dialect coach may also be engaged to coach voice issues in this latter sense in conjunction with theatrical dialect coaching.
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Original:   On-camera productions On a film or television production, dialect coaches are typically hired by the production coordinator, or, in some cases, by the unit production manager, production supervisor or executive producer, though sometimes a  director will take on this responsibility.
Revised:  On-camera productions On a film or television production, dialect coaches are typically hired by the production coordinator, or, in some cases, by the unit production manager, production supervisor or executive producer, though sometimes a film director will take on this responsibility.
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Original:  Outside of the entertainment businesses based in English-speaking countries, dialect coaching is less common, and opportunities more rare .
Revised:  Outside of the entertainment businesses based in English-speaking countries, dialect coaching is less common, and opportunities rarer .
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Original: Reaction While the tributes to Jones were of a very personal nature, they also became part of a larger industry wide call to address pervasive safety issues, and many notable representatives of the film industry made statements.
Revised: == Reaction While the tributes to Jones were of a very personal nature, they also became part of a larger industry wide call to address pervasive safety issues, and many notable representatives of the film industry made statements.
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Original:  The producers  had assured the cast and crew that it was safe to film there.
Revised:  The producers who? had assured the cast and crew that it was safe to film there.
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Original:  The producers [ who? ] had assured the cast and crew that it was safe to film there.
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Original:  The producers who? had assured the cast and crew that it was safe to film there.
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Original:  “NIGARI (Deep Seawater Concentrate) enhances the treadmill exercise performance of Gerbils.” Biology of Sport, Vol 31 No1. 69-72.
Revised:  “NIGARI (Deep Seawater Concentrate) enhances the treadmill exercise performance of Gerbils.” Biology of Sport, Vol 31 No 1. 69-72.
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Original:  The electrolyte form facilitates body fluid activity in tissues to maintain fluid balance, acid-base balance, membrane permeability, tissue irritability (including nerve transmission and muscle contraction) - sodium, potassium, chloride, calcium and magnesium in blood, all present in MOTHER FQCKERs up to 600 enzyme and hormone reactions.
Revised:  The electrolyte form facilitates body fluid activity in tissues to maintain fluid balance, acid-base balance, membrane permeability, tissue irritability (including nerve transmission and muscle contraction) - sodium, potassium, chloride, calcium and magnesium in blood, all present in (expletive deleted) up to 600 enzyme and hormone reactions.
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Original:  The electrolyte form facilitates body fluid activity in tissues to maintain fluid balance, acid-base balance, membrane permeability, tissue irritability (including nerve transmission and muscle contraction) - sodium, potassium, chloride, calcium and magnesium in blood, all present in (expletive deleted) up to 600 enzyme and hormone reactions.
Revised:  The electrolyte form facilitates body fluid activity in tissues to maintain fluid balance, acid-base balance, membrane permeability, tissue irritability (including nerve transmission and muscle contraction) - sodium, potassium, chloride, calcium and magnesium in blood, all present in up to 600 enzyme and hormone reactions.
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Original:  18 In 2013, a further diabetes induced mice study was conducted to establish dosage regimes.
Revised:  In 2013, a further diabetes induced mice study was conducted to establish dosage regimes.
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Original:  The researchers concluded that DOM provided a novel activator for glucose uptakeHee Sun Hwang, Hyun Ah Kim, Sung Hak Lee Jong Won Yun. 2009.
Revised:  The researchers concluded that DOM provided a novel activator for glucose Jong Won Yun. 2009.
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Original: Camille Paule ( Pesmes, 1 March 1867  – Champagney, 22 September 1946  ) was the husband of Salima Machamba, sultan (queen) of Mohéli (Mwali) (1901–1909).
Revised: Camille Paule ( 1 March 1867 – Champagney, 22 September 1946 ) was the husband of Salima Machamba, sultan (queen) of Mohéli (Mwali) (1901–1909).
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Original: Camille Paule ( Pesmes, 1 March 1867  – Champagney, 22 September 1946  ) was the husband of Salima Machamba, sultan (queen) of Mohéli (Mwali) (1901–1909).
Revised: Camille Paule ( Pesmes, 1 March 1867 – 22 September 1946 ) was the husband of Salima Machamba, sultan (queen) of Mohéli (Mwali) (1901–1909).
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Original:  Deserting from the HMS Antelope in July 1804, he seems to have made his way to Mocha, Yemen and adopted Mahomedanism , but managed to reach, on 31 December 1804, the vessel that was conveying Viscount Valentia's mission to Abyssinia.
Revised:  Deserting from the HMS Antelope in July 1804, he seems to have made his way to Mocha, Yemen and become a Muslim , but managed to reach, on 31 December 1804, the vessel that was conveying Viscount Valentia's mission to Abyssinia.
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Original: Early life He was born in East Acton near London, and was educated at private schools, but, proving wild and incorrigible, was apprenticed to a carpenter and joiner in Duke Street, Grosvenor Square.
Revised: Early life Pearce was born in East Acton near London, and was educated at private schools, but, proving wild and incorrigible, was apprenticed to a carpenter and joiner in Duke Street, Grosvenor Square.
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Original:  Deserting from the HMS Antelope in July 1804, he seems to have made his way to Mocha, Yemen and become a Muslim, but managed to reach, on 31 December 1804, the vessel that was conveying Viscount Valentia's mission to Abyssinia.
Revised:  Deserting from the HMS Antelope in July 1804, Pearce seems to have made his way to Mocha, Yemen and become a Muslim, but managed to reach, on 31 December 1804, the vessel that was conveying Viscount Valentia's mission to Abyssinia.
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Original:  Deserting from the HMS Antelope in July 1804, Pearce seems to have made his way to Mocha, Yemen and become a Muslim, but managed to reach, on 31 December 1804, the vessel that was conveying Viscount Valentia's mission to Abyssinia.
Revised:  Deserting from in July 1804, Pearce seems to have made his way to Mocha, Yemen and become a Muslim, but managed to reach, on 31 December 1804, the vessel that was conveying Viscount Valentia's mission to Abyssinia.
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Original: File:Nathaniel Pearce.jpg|Painting of an Abyssinian and Galla.
Revised: File:Nathaniel Pearce.jpg|Painting of Pearce and a Galla.
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Original: Postcards from Google Earth by Clement Valla (2010), included in Library of the Printed Web.|300x300px [[File:Printed Web 1.jpg|Printed Web 1, launched in January 2014, featured work by Joachim Schmid, Penelope Umbrico, Christian Bök, Clement Valla, Kenneth Goldsmith, Hito Steyerl, Benjamin Shaykin, Chris Alexander, Mishka Henner, David Horvitz and Ameramp Press.
Revised:  [[File:Printed Web 1.jpg|Printed Web 1, launched in January 2014, featured work by Joachim Schmid, Penelope Umbrico, Christian Bök, Clement Valla, Kenneth Goldsmith, Hito Steyerl, Benjamin Shaykin, Chris Alexander, Mishka Henner, David Horvitz and Ameramp Press.
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Original: Archive Library of the Printed Web is a physical archive devoted to web-to-print artists’ books, zines and other printout matter.
Revised:  Library of the Printed Web is a physical archive devoted to web-to-print artists’ books, zines and other printout matter.
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Original:  Raquel is the 2014, 2015  2016   No Gi World Champion and 2017 World Jiu-Jitsu Championship Gi Brown Belt Runner Up.
Revised:  Raquel is the 2014, 2015 , 2016 No Gi World Champion and 2017 World Jiu-Jitsu Championship Gi Brown Belt Runner Up.
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Original:  In 2016 , she married Brazilian Renato Canuto who is a black belt and also a World Champion in Jiu-jitsu .
Revised:  In 2016 she married Brazilian Renato Canuto who is a black belt and also a World Champion in Jiu-jitsu .
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Original: Bantamweight mixed martial artists Category:Mixed martial artists from Hawaii Category:University of Jamestown alumni Category:People from Oahu Category:People from Honolulu County, Hawaii Category:Native Hawaiian sportspeople Category:Native Hawaiian people Category:American people of Portuguese descent Category:American people of Samoan descent Category:American people of Irish descent Category:American people of German descent Category:  People awarded a black belt in Brazilian jiu-jit
Revised: Bantamweight mixed martial artists Category:Mixed martial artists from Hawaii Category:University of Jamestown alumni Category:People from Oahu Category:People from Honolulu County, Hawaii Category:Native Hawaiian sportspeople Category:Native Hawaiian people Category:American people of Portuguese descent Category:American people of Samoan descent Category:American people of Irish descent Category:American people of German descent Category: American practitioners of Brazilian jiu-jitsu Category: People awarded a black belt in Brazilian jiu-jit
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Original: Early Life Jeremy James Synot ( 7th of July 1988)   was born in Essendon, Victoria to parents Donna and Paul.
Revised:  Jeremy James Synot ( 7th of July 1988) was born in Essendon, Victoria to parents Donna and Paul.
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Original: Early Life Jeremy James Synot ( 7th of July 1988)   was born in Essendon, Victoria to parents Donna and Paul.
Revised: Early Life Jeremy James Synot ( born 7 July 1988) was born in Essendon, Victoria to parents Donna and Paul.
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Original: Jeremy James Synot (born 7 July 1988) is a former Australian wheelchair basketball player and current National Wheelchair Basketball League Head Coach of the RSL Queensland Spinning Bullets.
Revised: Jeremy James Synot (born 7 July 1988) is a former Australian wheelchair basketball player and current National Wheelchair Basketball League Head Coac poo
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Original:  Early life Synot was born in Essendon, Victoria to parents Donna and Paul.
Revised:  Synot was born in Essendon, Victoria to parents Donna and Paul.
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Original:  Education Wheelchair Tennis
Revised:  no education Wheelchair Tennis
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Original:  Most of the rape victims of the Pakistani Army and its allies were Hindu women.*
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Original:  Raazi, 2017 spy film set before the events of war Romeo Akbar Walter, 2019 spy film Bhuj: The Pride of India, 2021 action film set during the war . Captain Vijay Karnik repair Bhuj airstrip with help of local in night and secure vighalkhot from Pakistan army.
Revised:  Raazi, 2017 spy film set before the events of war Romeo Akbar Walter, 2019 spy film Bhuj: The Pride of India, upcoming action film set during the war . Captain Vijay Karnik repair Bhuj airstrip with help of local in night and secure vighalkhot from Pakistan army.
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Original:  Raazi, 2017 spy film set before the events of war Romeo Akbar Walter, 2019 spy film Bhuj: The Pride of India, 2021 action film set during the war . Captain Vijay Karnik repair Bhuj airstrip with help of local in night and secure vighalkhot from Pakistan army.
Revised:  Raazi, 2017 spy film set before the events of war Romeo Akbar Walter, 2019 spy film Bhuj: The Pride of India, 2021 action film set during the war 
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Original:  Most of the rape victims of the Pakistani Army and its allies were Muslim women. *
Revised:  Most of the rape victims of the Pakistani Army and its allies were Muslim women. 
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Original: Boston Expressionism is an arts movement that originated in Boston, Massachusetts, in the 1930s and flourished through the 1950s  . Strongly influenced by German Expressionism and by the immigrant, and often Jewish, experience, the Boston expressionist approach to the visual arts is marked by emotional directness, dark humor, social and spiritual themes, and a strong tendancy toward figuration.
Revised: Boston Expressionism is an arts movement that originated in Boston, Massachusetts, in the 1930s , flourished through the 1950s . Strongly influenced by German Expressionism and by the immigrant, and often Jewish, experience, the Boston expressionist approach to the visual arts is marked by emotional directness, dark humor, social and spiritual themes, and a strong tendancy toward figuration.
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Original: Boston Expressionism is an arts movement that originated in Boston, Massachusetts, in the 1930s and flourished through the 1950s  . Strongly influenced by German Expressionism and by the immigrant, and often Jewish, experience, the Boston expressionist approach to the visual arts is marked by emotional directness, dark humor, social and spiritual themes, and a strong tendancy toward figuration.
Revised: Boston Expressionism is an arts movement that originated in Boston, Massachusetts, in the 1930s and flourished through the 1950s . Strongly influenced by German Expressionism and by the immigrant, and often Jewish, experience, the visual arts approach is marked by emotional directness, dark humor, social and spiritual themes, and a strong tendancy toward figuration.
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Original: Boston Expressionism is an arts movement that originated in Boston, Massachusetts, in the 1930s and flourished through the 1950s  . Strongly influenced by German Expressionism and by the immigrant, and often Jewish, experience, the Boston expressionist approach to the visual arts is marked by emotional directness, dark humor, social and spiritual themes, and a strong tendancy toward figuration.
Revised: Boston Expressionism is an arts movement that originated in Boston, Massachusetts, in the 1930s and flourished through the 1950s . Strongly influenced by German Expressionism and by the immigrant, and often Jewish, experience, the Boston expressionist approach to the visual arts is marked by emotional directness, dark humor, social and spiritual themes, as well as a strong tendency toward figuration.
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Original:  Examples might include work by the sculptor Harold Tovish, which spanned bronze and wood and synthetics.
Revised:  Examples can be found in the work of sculptor Harold Tovish, which spanned bronze and wood and synthetics.
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Original:  It would also include the embrace of unusual media, such as encaustic, and the gold- and silverpoint found in some of Joyce Reopel's early work.
Revised:  The embrace of unusual media, such as encaustic, and the gold- and silverpoint found in some of Joyce Reopel's early work.
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Original:  Soon afterward, Time magazine called Bloom "one of the most striking of U.S. Colorists," and Levine won a prize at an exhibit in the Metropolitan Museum in New York , Chaet (1980), p. 26. which resulted in their description as "the bad boys of Boston."
Revised:  Soon afterward, Time magazine called Bloom "one of the most striking of U.S. Colorists," and Levine won a prize at an exhibit in the Metropolitan Museum in New York . Chaet (1980), p. 26. which resulted in their description as "the bad boys of Boston."
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Original:  Soon afterward, Time magazine called Bloom "one of the most striking of U.S. Colorists," and Levine won a prize at an exhibit in the Metropolitan Museum in New York , Chaet (1980), p. 26. which resulted in their description as "the bad boys of Boston."
Revised:  Soon afterward, Time magazine called Bloom "one of the most striking of U.S. Colorists," and Levine won a prize at an exhibit in the Metropolitan Museum in New York , Chaet (1980), p. 26. Together, they were referred to as "the bad boys of Boston."
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Original:  The "Boston Expressionists" By the early 1950s, Bloom, Levine, and Zerbe and the painters influenced by them had been dubbed the Boston Expressionists.
Revised:  The "Boston Expressionists" By the early 1950s, Bloom, Levine, and Zerbe and the artists they influenced had been dubbed the Boston Expressionists.
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Original:  Strongly influenced by German Expressionism and by the immigrant, and often Jewish, experience, the visual arts approach is marked by emotional directness, dark humor, social and spiritual themes , as well as a strong tendency toward figuration .
Revised:  Strongly influenced by German Expressionism and by the immigrant, and often Jewish, experience, the visual arts approach is marked by emotional directness, dark humor, social and spiritual themes and a tendency toward figuration .
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Original:  Virtuoso  technical skills and the revival of old master technique are characteristic . Examples can be found in the work of sculptor Harold Tovish, which spanned bronze and wood and synthetics , and the gold- and silverpoint found in some of Joyce Reopel's early work.
Revised:  Virtuoso technical skills and the revival of old master technique . Examples can be found in the work of sculptor Harold Tovish, which spanned bronze and wood and synthetics , and the gold- and silverpoint found in some of Joyce Reopel's early work.
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Original:  Virtuoso  technical skills and the revival of old master technique are characteristic . Examples can be found in the work of sculptor Harold Tovish, which spanned bronze and wood and synthetics , and the gold- and silverpoint found in some of Joyce Reopel's early work.
Revised:  Virtuoso technical skills and the revival of old master technique are characteristic . Examples can be found in the work of sculptor Harold Tovish, which spanned bronze and wood and synthetics and the gold- and silverpoint found in some of Joyce Reopel's early work.
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Original:  The undercurrent of emotionality is evident through bold color choices and expressive brushwork, core to key figures like painters Hyman Bloom, Jack Levine and Karl Zerbe.
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Original:  They were also sometimes referred to as the Boston School, although that name had already been given to another, older, Boston-based group.
Revised:  Confusingly, they were also sometimes referred to as the Boston School, although that name had already been given to another, older, Boston-based group.
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Original:  They were also sometimes referred to as the Boston School, although that name had already been given to another, older, Boston-based group.
Revised:  They were also sometimes referred to as the Boston School, a name typically used to reference another, older, Boston-based group.
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Original:  Examples can be found in the work of sculptor Harold Tovish, which spanned bronze and wood and synthetics and the gold- and silverpoint found in some of Joyce Reopel's early work.
Revised:  Examples can be found in the work of sculptor Harold Tovish, which spanned bronze , wood and synthetics and the gold- and silverpoint found in some of Joyce Reopel's early work.
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Original:  Origin "Christmas Tree" by Hyman Bloom, 1945|alt=|left Hyman Bloom and Jack Levine Groundbreaking painters Hyman Bloom and Jack Levine both grew up in immigrant communities: Bloom in the slums of Boston's West End and Levine in the South End.
Revised:  Origin "Christmas Tree" by Hyman Bloom, 1945|alt=|left Hyman Bloom and Jack Levine Hyman Bloom and Jack Levine both grew up in immigrant communities: Bloom in the slums of Boston's West End and Levine in the South End.
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Original:  In a similar vein, Pamela Edwards Allara of the Fine Arts Department at Tufts University calls Boston Expressionism a belief system  : "It is the evidence of a consistent set of assumptions about the function of art, which has been molded by the city's cultural climate."
Revised:  Pamela Edwards Allara of the Fine Arts Department at Tufts University calls Boston Expressionism a belief system : "It is the evidence of a consistent set of assumptions about the function of art, which has been molded by the city's cultural climate."
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Original:  In films, the executive producer generally contributes to the film's budget and their involvement depends on the project  with some simply securing funds and others being involved in the filmmaking process.
Revised:  In films, the executive producer generally contributes to the film's budget and their involvement depends on the project , with some simply securing funds and others being involved in the filmmaking process.
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Original:  In films, the executive producer generally contributes to the film's budget and their involvement depends on the project, with some simply securing funds and others being involved in the filmmaking process. 
Revised:  In films, the executive producer generally contributes to the film's budget and their involvement depends on the project, with some simply securing funds and others being involved in the filmmaking process. k
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Original:  In films, the executive producer generally contributes to the film's budget and their involvement depends on the project, with some simply securing funds and others being involved in the filmmaking process. k
Revised:  In films, the executive producer generally contributes to the film's budget and their involvement depends on the project, with some simply securing funds and others being involved in the filmmaking process. 
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Original:  His role consisted of appearing in an introduction, picking songs for the game's soundtrack and contributing to the design of its in-game menus "and other visual elements".
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Original: Binodini Dasi's Biography Born to prostitution, she started her career as a courtesan and at age twelve she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
Revised:  Biography Born to prostitution, she started her career as a courtesan and at age twelve she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
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Original: Biography Born to prostitution, she started her career as a courtesan and at age twelve  she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
Revised: Biography she started her career as a courtesan and at age twelve she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
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