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Original:  Bill is expected reached the third category on the Safif-Simpson hurricane intensity scale.
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Original: 250px|Sayano-Shushenskaya hydroelectric plant The Sayano–Shushenskaya hydroelectric power plant, located on the Yenisei river in Russia, experienced a problem after a hydraulic shock in water pipes caused a flood in the engine room.
Revised: 250px|Sayano-Shushenskaya hydroelectric plant The Sayano–Shushenskaya hydroelectric power plant, located on the Yenisei river in Russia, experienced a problem after a pressure surge caused water pipes to burst, flooding in the engine room.
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Original: 250px|Sayano-Shushenskaya hydroelectric plant The Sayano–Shushenskaya hydroelectric power plant , located on the Yenisei river in Russia, experienced a problem after a pressure surge caused water pipes to burst, flooding in the engine room.
Revised: 250px|Sayano-Shushenskaya hydroelectric plant The Sayano–Shushenskaya hydroelectric power station , located on the Yenisei river in Russia, experienced a problem after a pressure surge caused water pipes to burst, flooding in the engine room.
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Original:  It was opened in 1978 and generates more than 23.5 TeraWatt-hours  annually
Revised:  It was opened in 1978 and generates more than 23.5 terawatt hour annually
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Original:  It was opened in 1978 and generates more than 23.5 TeraWatt-hours  annually
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Original: 250px|  Sayano-Shushenskaya hydroelectric plant The Sayano–Shushenskaya hydroelectric power station, located on the Yenisei river in Russia, experienced a problem after a pressure surge caused water pipes to burst, flooding in the engine room.
Revised: 250px| The Sayano-Shushenskaya hydroelectric plant The Sayano–Shushenskaya hydroelectric power station, located on the Yenisei river in Russia, experienced a problem after a pressure surge caused water pipes to burst, flooding in the engine room.
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Original:  It was opened in 1978 and generates more than 23.5 terawatt hour s annually
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Original:  It was opened in 1978 and generates more than 23.5 terawatt hour s annually
Revised:  It was opened in 1978 and generates more than 23.5 terawatt hour terawatt hours annually
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Original:  It was opened in 1978 and generates more than 23.5  terawatt hours annually
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Original: 250px|The Sayano-Shushenskaya hydroelectric plant The Sayano–Shushenskaya hydroelectric power station, located on the Yenisei river in Russia, experienced a problem after a pressure surge caused water pipes to burst, flooding in the engine room.
Revised: 250px|The Sayano-Shushenskaya hydroelectric plant The Sayano–Shushenskaya hydroelectric power station, located on the Yenisei river in Russia, experienced a problem after a pressure surge caused water pipes to burst, flooding the engine room.
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Original: In an interview with the Brazilian Globo network from his home in São Paolo, he claimed that at no point was he afraid of death.
Revised: In an interview with the Brazilian Globo network from his home in São Paolo, 
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Original:  Responding to questions regarding a possible return to the driving seat: "Notwithstanding a speedy recovery the date of my return is still an unknown.
Revised:  responding to questions regarding a possible return to the driving seat: "Notwithstanding a speedy recovery the date of my return is still an unknown.
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Original: Image:Felipe Massa 2008 Algarve.jpg |Felipe Massa in 2008. ]] Formula 1 driver Felipe Massa has been speaking to the World's press about the accident which left him seriously injured during the qualifying session of the 2009 Hungarian Grand Prix.
Revised: Image:Felipe Massa 2008 Algarve.jpg |Felipe Massa in 2008. ]] Formula One driver Felipe Massa has been speaking to the World's press about the accident which left him seriously injured during the qualifying session of the 2009 Hungarian Grand Prix.
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Original: Image:Felipe Massa 2008 Algarve.jpg |Felipe Massa in 2008. ]] Formula 1 driver Felipe Massa has been speaking to the World's press about the accident which left him seriously injured during the qualifying session of the 2009 Hungarian Grand Prix.
Revised: Image:Felipe Massa 2008 Algarve.jpg |Felipe Massa in 2008. ]] Formula 1 driver Felipe Massa has been speaking to the press about the accident which left him seriously injured during the qualifying session of the 2009 Hungarian Grand Prix.
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Original:  Massa added that his wife, Rafaela, who is six months pregnant with their first child, despite being continuously anxious for her husband, had never asked him to quit racing  .
Revised:  Massa added that his wife, Rafaela, who is six months pregnant with their first child, had never asked him to quit racing .
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Original:  Massa added that his wife, Rafaela, who is six months pregnant with their first child, despite being continuously anxious for her husband, had never asked him to quit racing  .
Revised:  Massa added that his wife, Rafaela, who is six months pregnant with their first child, despite being continuously anxious for her husband, had never asked him to quit racing , despite being continuously anxious for her husband .
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Original:  The accident has raised concerns throughout  motorsport over safety , and other incidents such as the tragic death of Henry Surtees one week earlier, and the rogue wheel of Fernando Alonso a day later have only given these concerns more credibility.
Revised:  The accident has raised concerns throughout the world of motorsport over safety , and other incidents such as the tragic death of Henry Surtees one week earlier, and the rogue wheel of Fernando Alonso a day later have only given these concerns more credibility.
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Original:  The accident has raised concerns throughout  motorsport over safety , and other incidents such as the tragic death of Henry Surtees one week earlier, and the rogue wheel of Fernando Alonso a day later have only given these concerns more credibility.
Revised:  The accident has raised concerns throughout motorsport over safety . Other incidents such as the tragic death of Henry Surtees one week earlier, and the rogue wheel of Fernando Alonso a day later have only given these concerns more credibility.
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Original:  However, the nature of Massa's accident, and his ability to be discharged from Hospital after only one week can only demonstrate the high levels of safety in Formula 1.
Revised:  However, the nature of Massa's accident, and his ability to be discharged from hospital after only one week can only demonstrate the high levels of safety in Formula 1.
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Original:  However, the nature of Massa's accident, and his ability to be discharged from Hospital after only one week can only demonstrate the high levels of safety in Formula 1.
Revised:  However, the nature of Massa's accident, and his ability to be discharged from Hospital after only one week makes a case for Formula One that they have high levels of safety in Formula 1.
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Original:  However, the nature of Massa's accident, and his ability to be discharged from Hospital after only one week can only demonstrate the high levels of safety in Formula 1.
Revised:  However, the nature of Massa's accident, and his ability to be discharged from Hospital after only one week can only demonstrate the high levels of safety .
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Original:  Despite the visually alarming injuries which Massa displays, his main concern is the fact that Michael Schumacher cannot deputise for him after all: "Now for Ferrari without Schumi it will be more difficult ".
Revised:  Despite the visually alarming injuries which Massa displays, his main concern is the fact that Michael Schumacher cannot deputise for him after all: "Now for Ferrari without Schumi it will be more difficult ."
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Original:  She reached the final after a close-run match against Elena Dementieva that saw her win the finall set tie break from 6-2 down.
Revised:  She reached the final after a close-run match against Elena Dementieva that saw her win the final set tie break from 6-2 down.
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Original: Janković playing earlier this year Serbian tennis player Jelena Janković has won the women's tournament of the 2009 Cincinnati Open, also known as the Western & Southern Financial Group Open .
Revised: Janković playing earlier this year Serbian tennis player Jelena Janković has won the women's tournament of the 2009 Western & Southern Financial Group Open .
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Original: The centrepiece at the exhibition will be accompanied by King George IV's jacket worn on his television appearance, and other previously unseen memorabilia from the period in the immediate run up to the Second World War.
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Original:  In a free exhibition to mark the 70th anniversary of the declaration of WWII, from August 20, 2009 visitors will be able to have an unprecedented insight into the mind of the Prime Minister at the helm of the government when war was declared on September 3, 1939.
Revised:  In a free exhibition , marking the 70th anniversary of the declaration of WWII, from August 20, 2009 visitors will be able to have an unprecedented insight into the mind of the Prime Minister at the helm of the government when war was declared on September 3, 1939.
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Original:  In a free exhibition to mark the 70th anniversary of the declaration of WWII, from August 20, 2009 visitors will be able to have an unprecedented insight into the mind of the Prime Minister at the helm of the government when war was declared on September 3, 1939.
Revised:  In a free exhibition to mark the 70th anniversary of the declaration of WWII, will allow visitors to have an unprecedented insight into the mind of the Prime Minister at the helm of the government when war was declared on September 3, 1939.
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Original:  His entry for that day, a note scribbled in pencil reads simply: "War declared ".
Revised:  His entry for that day, a note scribbled in pencil reads simply: "War declared ."
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Original: Image:Arthur-Neville-Chamberlain.jpg |Neville Chamberlain during his time as Prime Minister.
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Original:  There was much speculation as to the whereabouts of the vessel, after it did not arrive in Bajaia , Algeria as scheduled on August 4, 2009.
Revised:  There was much speculation as to the whereabouts of the vessel, after it did not arrive in Béjaïa , Algeria as scheduled on August 4, 2009.
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Original:  He extuiguished a fire blocking an escape and prevented panicked passengers from trampling a wounded victim.
Revised:  He extinguished a fire blocking an escape and prevented panicked passengers from trampling a wounded victim.
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Original:  "There was smoke and fire everywhere," Quinlan said of the accident, which killed 21 people from Indoensia and Australia.
Revised:  "There was smoke and fire everywhere," Quinlan said of the accident, which killed 21 people from Indonesia and Australia.
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Original: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg|New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May]] Japan opposition Democratic Party of Japan leader Yukio Hatoyama won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday and will be named the 93rd Prime Minister of Japan.
Revised: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg|New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May]] Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan leader Yukio Hatoyama won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday and will be named the 93rd Prime Minister of Japan.
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Original: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg|New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May]]  Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan leader Yukio Hatoyama won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday and will be named the 93rd Prime Minister of Japan.
Revised: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg|New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May]] Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan leader Yukio Hatoyama won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday and will be named the 93rd Prime Minister of Japan.
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Original: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg|New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May]]  Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan leader Yukio Hatoyama won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday and will be named the 93rd Prime Minister of Japan.
Revised: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg|New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May]] Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan , Yukio Hatoyama, won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday and will be named the 93rd Prime Minister of Japan.
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Original: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg|New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May]]  Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan leader Yukio Hatoyama won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday and will be named the 93rd Prime Minister of Japan.
Revised: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg|New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May]] Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan leader Yukio Hatoyama won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday . He will be named the 93rd Prime Minister of Japan.
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Original:  Hatoyama, got votes against by former Prime Minister of Japan and Liberal Democratic Party leader Taro Aso.
Revised:  Hatoyama, ran against former Prime Minister of Japan and Liberal Democratic Party leader Taro Aso.
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Original:  The results of the election were announced today, less that 2 and a half hours after polling stations closed, and end 54 years of nearly unbroken rule by the LDP.
Revised:  The results of the election were announced today, less that two and a half hours after polling stations closed, and end 54 years of nearly unbroken rule by the LDP.
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Original:  He has said that he will stay on as leader until a new one is chosen.
Revised:  Aso also said that he will stay on as leader until a new one is chosen.
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Original:  The Democratic Party has already informally allocated a number of cabinet positions , and has set to work drafting improvements to the existing stimulus package.
Revised:  The Democratic Party has already informally allocated a number of cabinet positions and has set to work drafting improvements to the existing stimulus package.
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Original: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg| New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan, Yukio Hatoyama ,  won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday.
Revised:  New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan, Yukio Hatoyama , won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday.
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Original: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg| New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan, Yukio Hatoyama ,  won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday.
Revised: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg| New Prime Minister in May Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan, Yukio Hatoyama , won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday.
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Original: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg| New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan, Yukio Hatoyama ,  won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday.
Revised: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg| New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May Leader of the Japanese opposition , won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday.
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Original: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg| New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan, Yukio Hatoyama ,  won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday.
Revised: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg| New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan, Yukio Hatoyama , , won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday.
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Original: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg| New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan, Yukio Hatoyama ,  won a majority of votes in the House of Representatives of Japan in the Japanese general election on Sunday.
Revised: File:Yukio Hatoyama (VOA Photo).jpg| New Prime Minister Yukio Hatoyama in May Leader of the Japanese opposition Democratic Party of Japan, Yukio Hatoyama , won a majority of votes in the in the on Sunday.
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Original:  Hatoyama ran against now former Prime Minister of Japan and Liberal Democratic Party leader Taro Aso .
Revised:  Hatoyama ran against now former Prime Minister of Japan and leader .
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Original: Police are seeking real estate tycoon Ryan Jenkins, 32, a contestant on the reality show Megan Wants a Millionaire, in which Megan Houserman dates several rich men with the aim of ultimately becoming the girlfriend of one of them.
Revised: Police are seeking real estate tycoon Ryan Jenkins, 32, a contestant on the reality show Megan Wants a Millionaire, in which Megan Hauserman dates several rich men with the aim of ultimately becoming the girlfriend of one of them.
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Original: Police are seeking real estate tycoon Ryan Alexander Jenkins, 32, a contestant on the reality show Megan Wants a Millionaire, in which former Rock of Love hopeful Megan Hauserman dates several rich men with the aim of ultimately becoming the girlfriend of one of them.
Revised: Police are seeking real estate tycoon Ryan Jenkins, 32, a contestant on the reality show Megan Wants a Millionaire, in which former Rock of Love hopeful Megan Hauserman dates several rich men with the aim of ultimately becoming the girlfriend of one of them.
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Original:  The move makes it illegal to sell the Japanese horror film in the UK   
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Original:  These include the sexually violent Murder-Set-Pieces and Terrorists, Killers And Other Wackos, a film showing graphic clips of real-life torture and killing   
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Original:  The move makes it illegal to sell the Japanese horror film in the UK .
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Original:  The move makes it illegal to sell or supply the Japanese horror film in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The move makes it illegal to sell the Japanese horror film in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  For the past few days, the storm has been moving towards the west-northwest, though that course is expected to change later this week as it turns more towards the north.
Revised:  For the past few days, the storm has been moving towards the west-northwest, but that is expected to change later this week as it turns more towards the north.
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Original:  For the past few days, the storm has been moving towards the west-northwest, but that is expected to change later this week as it turns more towards the north.
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Original:  For the past few days, the storm has been moving towards the west-northwest, but that is expected to change later this week as it turns more towards the north.
Revised:  For the past few days, the storm has been moving towards the west-northwest, but that is expected to change later this week as it turns more toward the north.
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Original:  AST August 19 (0900 UTC August 19), Hurricane Bill is located within 15 nautical miles of 18.0°N 54.9°W, about 460 mi (740 km) east of the Leeward Islands.
Revised:  AST August 19 (0900 UTC August 19), Hurricane Bill was located within 15 nautical miles of 18.0°N 54.9°W, about 460 mi (740 km) east of the Leeward Islands.
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Original:  Maximum sustained winds are near 115 knots (135 mph, 215 km/h), with stronger gusts.
Revised:  Maximum sustained winds were near 115 knots (135 mph, 215 km/h), with stronger gusts.
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Original: Bermuda could be  the most significant threat from Bill, and officials there have been monitoring the storm's progress.
Revised: Bermuda could be under the most significant threat from Bill, and officials there have been monitoring the storm's progress.
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Original: Michael Jackson doctor posts message on YouTube Michael Jackson doctor Conrad Murray has posted a one minute video on entertainment site TMZ - and now YouTube - so that he can reach out to his loved ones because he can't contact them by phone or by e-mail.
Revised: Michael Jackson doctor Michael Jackson doctor Conrad Murray has posted a one minute video on entertainment site TMZ - and now YouTube - so that he can reach out to his loved ones because he can't contact them by phone or by e-mail.
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Original: Michael Jackson doctor posts message on YouTube Michael Jackson doctor Conrad Murray has posted a one minute video on entertainment site TMZ - and now YouTube - so that he can reach out to his loved ones because he can't contact them by phone or by e-mail.
Revised: Michael Jackson doctor posts message on YouTube Conrad Murray has posted a one minute video on entertainment site TMZ - and now YouTube - so that he can reach out to his loved ones because he can't contact them by phone or by e-mail.
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Original:  Fox News have also said that investigators had hoped to charge Murray with a more serious crime than manslaughter - second-degree murder . Category:Culture and entertainme
Revised:  Fox News have also said that investigators had hoped to charge Murray with a more serious crime than manslaughter - second-degree murder Category:Culture and entertainme
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Original:  Fox News have also said that investigators had hoped to charge Murray with a more serious crime than manslaughter - second-degree murder . Category:Culture and entertainme
Revised:  Fox News have also said that investigators had hoped to charge Murray with a more serious crime than manslaughter - second-degree murder . 
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