wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm  then placed her in the rear cab , the girl had also screamed  which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with the mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux but was dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Revised:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm and then placed her in the rear cab , the girl had also screamed which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with the mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux but was dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm  then placed her in the rear cab , the girl had also screamed  which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with the mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux but was dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Revised:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm then placed her in the rear cab . The girl had also screamed which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with the mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux but was dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm  then placed her in the rear cab , the girl had also screamed  which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with the mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux but was dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Revised:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm then placed her in the rear cab , the girl had also screamed , which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with the mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux but was dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm  then placed her in the rear cab , the girl had also screamed  which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with the mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux but was dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Revised:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm then placed her in the rear cab , the girl had also screamed which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with her mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux but was dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm  then placed her in the rear cab , the girl had also screamed  which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with the mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux but was dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Revised:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm then placed her in the rear cab , the girl had also screamed which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with the mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux and being dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  A witness had tried to follow the vehicle for a short distance but lost sight of it but had told police it had black and yellow plates starting with BD or DB.
Revised:  A witness followed the vehicle for a short distance but lost sight of it but had told police it had black and yellow plates starting with BD or DB.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  A witness had tried to follow the vehicle for a short distance but lost sight of it but had told police it had black and yellow plates starting with BD or DB.
Revised:  A witness had tried to follow the vehicle for a short distance until loosing sight of it but had told police it had black and yellow plates starting with BD or DB.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A witness had tried to follow the vehicle for a short distance but lost sight of it but had told police it had black and yellow plates starting with BD or DB.
Revised:  A witness had tried to follow the vehicle for a short distance but lost sight of it . The witness told police it had black and yellow plates starting with BD or DB.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The girl was playing in her front yard, was abducted by a man at approximately 11:30am (AEDT) on Sunday.
Revised:  The girl was playing in her front yard, when abducted by a man at approximately 11:30am (AEDT) on Sunday.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm and then placed her in the rear  cab.
Revised:  She tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm and then placed her in the rear cab.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm and then placed her in the rear  cab.
Revised:  She had tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm and then placed her in the rear of his cab.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The girl had also screamed, which had alerted her mother and neighbours, with her mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux and being dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Revised:  The girl 's scream alerted her mother and neighbours, with her mother getting hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux and being dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  She tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm and then placed her in the rear of his cab.
Revised:  She tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm and then into the rear of his cab.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The girl's scream alerted her mother and neighbours, with her mother getting  hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux and being dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Revised:  The girl's scream alerted her mother and neighbours, with her mother getting a hold of the rear tray of the Toyota Hilux and being dragged along the road before losing her grip.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  She tried to cling to a tree but the man over powered her, placed her under his arm and then into the rear of his cab.
Revised:  She tried to cling to a tree but the man overpowered her, placing her under his arm and then into the rear of his cab.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: A witness followed the vehicle for a short distance until loosing sight of it.
Revised: It is believed a witness followed the vehicle for a short distance until loosing sight of it.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The witness told police it had black and yellow plates starting with BD or DB.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  It also points to evidence from the bombers  families, where two of the men had pregnant wives.
Revised:  It also points to evidence from the bombers ' families, where two of the men had pregnant wives.
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Original:  He said during the broadcast there were other White House sources as well, but declined during the interview to disclose their names  
Revised:  He said during the broadcast there were other White House sources as well, but declined during the interview to disclose their names . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original: The revelation runs counter to the claim by Rove during his grand jury testimony, leaked to the AP , that he learned of the covert status of Plame from two reporters, Cooper and Robert Novak.
Revised: The revelation runs counter to the claim by Rove during his grand jury testimony, leaked to the Associated Press , that he learned of the covert status of Plame from two reporters, Cooper and Robert Novak.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The waiver was signed only hours prior to the contempt of court proceedings that would have put him in jail, the fate of NYT reporter Judith Miller who refused to reveal her sources to the same court.
Revised:  The waiver was signed only hours prior to the contempt of court proceedings that would have put him in jail, the fate of The New York Times reporter Judith Miller who refused to reveal her sources to the same court.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The waiver was signed only hours prior to the contempt of court proceedings that would have put him in jail, the fate of The New York Times reporter Judith Miller who refused to reveal her sources to the same court.
Revised:  The waiver was signed only hours prior to the contempt of court proceedings that would have put him in jail, the fate of the New York Times reporter Judith Miller who refused to reveal her sources to the same court.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He newly revealed that he also discussed Plame with Lewis Libby, the deputy Chief of Staff for the U.S. Vice-President Dick Cheney.
Revised:  He also revealed that he also discussed Plame with Lewis Libby, the deputy Chief of Staff for the U.S. Vice-President Dick Cheney.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He newly revealed that he also discussed Plame with Lewis Libby, the deputy Chief of Staff for the U.S. Vice-President Dick Cheney.
Revised:  He newly revealed that he discussed Plame with Lewis Libby, the deputy Chief of Staff for the U.S. Vice-President Dick Cheney.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The revelation runs counter to the claim by Rove during his grand jurytestimony , leaked to the Associated Press , that he learned of the covert status of Plamefrom two reporters, Cooper and Robert Novak .
Revised:  The revelation corroborates Rove's testimony to the grand jury , leaked to the Associated Press , that he learned of the covert status of Plamefrom two reporters, Cooper and Robert Novak .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The waiver was signed only hours prior to the contempt of court proceedings that would have put him in jail, the fate of the New York Times reporter Judith Miller who refused to reveal her sources to the same court.
Revised:  This second waiver was signed only hours prior to the contempt of court proceedings that would have put him in jail, the fate of the New York Times reporter Judith Miller who refused to reveal her sources to the same court.
Edit intent: style
Original: According to The New York Times , a joint covert operation by United States and Pakistan forces has captured the Taliban's top military commander, Mullah Abdul Ghani Baradar.
Revised: According to reports , a joint covert operation by United States and Pakistan forces has captured the Taliban's top military commander, Mullah Abdul Ghani Baradar.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: The  Times first reported Baradar's capture late Monday.
Revised: The New York Times first reported Baradar's capture late Monday.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: According to reports, a joint covert operation by United States and Pakistan forces has captured the Taliban's top military commander, Mullah Abdul Ghani Baradar.
Revised: According to reports, a joint covert operation by United States and Pakistan forces have captured the Taliban's top military commander, Mullah Abdul Ghani Baradar.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: According to reports, a joint covert operation by United States and Pakistan forces have captured the Taliban's top military commander, Mullah Abdul Ghani Baradar . Baradar was captured seven to nine days ago according to officials.
Revised: According to reports, a joint covert operation by United States and Pakistan forces have captured the Taliban's top military commander, w| Abdul Ghani Baradar . Baradar was captured seven to nine days ago according to officials.
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Original:  Officials describe Baradar as second in influence only to the Taliban's founder, Mullah Mohammed Omar .
Revised:  Officials describe Baradar as second in influence only to the Taliban's founder, Mullah .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Adding, "They are facing big problems in Marja .
Revised:  Adding, "They are facing big problems in a .
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Original:  He is safe and free and he is in Afghanistan." Pakistani Inter-Services Intelligence (ISI) and American Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) agents say they are interrogating Baradar, who was in charge of the Taliban's day-to-day military operations and its governing political council.
Revised:  He is safe and free and he is in Afghanistan." Pakistani (ISI) and American Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) agents say they are interrogating Baradar, who was in charge of the Taliban's day-to-day military operations and its governing political council.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Speaking in Islamabad, Pakistani Interior Minister Rehman Malik would not confirm the report of Baradar's arrest.
Revised:  Speaking in Islamabad, Pakistani Interior Minister would not confirm the report of Baradar's arrest.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  But he said that since the U.S.-led coalition invaded the Taliban stronghold of Marja in southern Afghanistan several days ago, Pakistan has arrested suspected militants who have fled across the border.
Revised:  But he said that since the U.S.-led coalition in southern Afghanistan several days ago, Pakistan has arrested suspected militants who have fled across the border.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: According to  announcement made by the Office for National Statistics (ONS) on Tuesday, the inflation rate of the United Kingdom, or the Consumer Prices Index (CPI) increased to 3.5\% in January 2010, an increase of 0.6\% from December 2009.
Revised: According to an announcement made by the Office for National Statistics (ONS) on Tuesday, the inflation rate of the United Kingdom, or the Consumer Prices Index (CPI) increased to 3.5\% in January 2010, an increase of 0.6\% from December 2009.
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Original:   Mervyn King, who is the Governor of the Bank of England has written an explanatory letter to Chancellor of the Exchequer Alistair Darling.
Revised:  Mervyn King, who is the Governor of the Bank of England has written a required explanatory letter to Chancellor of the Exchequer Alistair Darling.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: According to an announcement made by the Office for National Statistics (ONS) on Tuesday, the inflation rate of the United Kingdom , or the Consumer Prices Index (CPI) increased to 3.5\% in January 2010, an increase of 0.6\% from December 2009.
Revised: According to an announcement made by the Office for National Statistics (ONS) on Tuesday, the inflation rate of the United Kingdom measured by the |Consumer Price Index (CPI) increased to 3.5\% in January 2010, an increase of 0.6\% from December 2009.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  For the UK, this has been reported to have been the second highest inflation rate increase in the space of two months.
Revised:  For the UK, this has been reported to have been the second record inflation rate increase in the space of two months.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The causes of this inflation rate rise include a 70\% rise in oil prices, with the worth of Value added tax recently being increased to 17.5\%.
Revised:  The causes of this inflation rise include a 70\% rise in oil prices, with the worth of Value added tax recently being increased to 17.5\%.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The causes of this inflation rate rise include a 70\% rise in oil prices, with the worth of Value added tax recently being increased to 17.5\%.
Revised:  The causes of this inflation rate rise include a 70\% rise in oil prices, and value added tax recently being increased to 17.5\%.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The headline  rate of the Retail Prices Index (RPI) also increased from 2.4\% for the month of December 2009 to 3.7\% for the month of January 2010.
Revised:  The headline inflation rate of the Retail Prices Index (RPI) also increased from 2.4\% for the month of December 2009 to 3.7\% for the month of January 2010.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Meanwhile, the underlying rate of the Retail Prices Index increased from 3.8\% for the month of December 2009 to 4.6\% for the month of January 2010.
Revised:  Meanwhile, the underlying rate of RPI increased from 3.8\% for the month of December 2009 to 4.6\% for the month of January 2010.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Meanwhile, the underlying rate of the Retail Prices Index increased from 3.8\% for the month of December 2009 to 4.6\% for the month of January 2010.
Revised:  Meanwhile, the underlying rate of the Retail Prices Index increased from 3.8\% to 4.6\% for the month of January 2010.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Meanwhile, the underlying rate of the Retail Prices Index increased from 3.8\% for the month of December 2009 to 4.6\% for the month of January 2010.
Revised:  Meanwhile, the underlying rate of the Retail Prices Index increased from 3.8\% for the month of December 2009 to 4.6\% over the same period.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Alistair Darling then wrote a letter in response, which said that the future expectations of the inflation was "subject to some uncertainty" as countries around the world continue to recover from what Darling called the "deepest downturn in modern times"
Revised:  Alistair Darling then wrote a letter in response, which said that the future expectations of the inflation was "subject to some uncertainty" as countries around the world continue to recover from what he called the "deepest downturn in modern times"
Edit intent: fluency
Original: According to an announcement made by the Office for National Statistics (ONS) on Tuesday, the inflation rate of the United Kingdom measured by the | Consumer Price Index (CPI) increased to 3.5\% in January 2010, an increase of 0.6\% from December 2009.
Revised: According to an announcement made by the Office for National Statistics (ONS) on Tuesday, the inflation rate of the United Kingdom measured by the Consumer Price Index (CPI) increased to 3.5\% in January 2010, an increase of 0.6\% from December 2009.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  For the UK, this has been reported to have been the second record inflation rate increase in the space of two months .
Revised:  For the UK, this is the second largest month-on-month inflation rate increase in the space of two months .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The inflation rate for the country has also now reached the highest level since November 2008.
Revised:  The inflation rate for the country has also now reached its highest level since November 2008.
Edit intent: style
Original:  The "Critic's choice" award was given to British music artist Ellie Goulding.
Revised: At one point during the programme, a pre-recorded video with Prince Harry of Wales in it was shown. In the video, Prince Harry said: "You'll be pleased to know that I'm not gonna sing, but only because I don't want to show up the next act. The BRITs is a celebration of all that is totally outstanding and unique about British music. But what's less well known about the BRITs is the fantastic work it does raising millions of pounds for the BRIT trust which has benefited thousands of young people to develop their talents and generally enrich our society. Well done on all you've achieved. I hope you have a fantastic evening." The "Critic's choice" award was given to British music artist Ellie Goulding.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Revised:  Telephone and Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Revised:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Revised:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Revised:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Revised:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love " , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Revised:  "Telephone " and " Dance in the Dark " . Dizzee Rascal and Florence and the Machine performed a duet entitled " You've Got the Dirtee Love " , which was a merger of two songs - " You've Got the Love , which was originally recorded by The Source and Candi Staton - and later covered by Florence and the Machine - and "Dirtee Cash" , which was originally performed by Dizzee Rascal.
Edit intent: fluency