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Original:  These compensatory changes, termed "concentric hypertrophy," reduce the increase in wall tension observed in aortic stenosi 
Revised:  These compensatory changes, termed "concentric hypertrophy," reduce the increase in wall tension observed in aortic stenosis. 
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Original: Sarcomeres are added in parallel, as  in hypertrophic cardiomyopathy.
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Original:  Category:Anatomical pathology Category:Physical exercise Category:Exercise physiology Category:Tissues (biology) In the heart  concentric hypertrophy is related to increased pressure overload of the heart, often due to hypertension and/or aortic stenosis.
Revised:  In the heart concentric hypertrophy is related to increased pressure overload of the heart, often due to hypertension and/or aortic stenosis.
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Original:  Category:Anatomical pathology Category:Physical exercise Category:Exercise physiology Category:Tissues (biology) In the heart  concentric hypertrophy is related to increased pressure overload of the heart, often due to hypertension and/or aortic stenosis.
Revised:  Category:Anatomical pathology Category:Physical exercise Category:Exercise physiology Category:Tissues (biology) In the heart , concentric hypertrophy is related to increased pressure overload of the heart, often due to hypertension and/or aortic stenosis.
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Original:  Category:Muscular system Category:Cardiomegaly Laplace's law for a sphere states wall stress (T) is proportionate to the product of the transmural pressure (P) and cavitary radius (r) and inversely proportionate to wall thickness (W): In response to the pressure overload left ventricular wall thickness markedly increases—while the cavitary radius remains relatively unchanged.
Revised:  Laplace's law for a sphere states wall stress (T) is proportionate to the product of the transmural pressure (P) and cavitary radius (r) and inversely proportionate to wall thickness (W): In response to the pressure overload left ventricular wall thickness markedly increases—while the cavitary radius remains relatively unchanged.
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Original:  These compensatory changes, termed "concentric hypertrophy," reduce the increase in wall tension observed in aortic stenosis. 
Revised:  These compensatory changes, termed "concentric hypertrophy," reduce the increase in wall tension observed in aortic stenosis. References
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Original: New page. Re-conquest and rebellion See also Tudor re-conquest of Ireland .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There is some debate about why Henry VIII decided to re-conquer Ireland.
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Original: New page. Re-conquest and rebellion See also Tudor re-conquest of Ireland .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There is some debate about why Henry VIII decided to re-conquer Ireland.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Civil Wars and Penal Laws Image:Oliver Cromwell.jpg|Oliver Cromwell, who re-conquered Ireland in 1649-1651 after Irish Catholic rebellion and civil war, on behalf of the English Commonwealth.
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Original:  The ideal survivor is bravely committed to mainstream medicine and optimistic or even certain of a physical cure.
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Original:  He or she is open about diagnosis and treatment and becomes an educated, empowered medical consumer.
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Original:  He or she is open about diagnosis and treatment and becomes an educated, empowered medical consumer.
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Original: The list of designated orphan drugs includes such blockbuster drugs as Abilify, Provigil, Vioxx, Botox, and Cialis Regulatory harmonization In an effort to reduce the burden on manufacturers applying for orphan drug status, the FDA and EMA agreed in late 2007 to utilize a common application process for both agencies.
Revised:  Regulatory harmonization In an effort to reduce the burden on manufacturers applying for orphan drug status, the FDA and EMA agreed in late 2007 to utilize a common application process for both agencies.
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Original: मठगांवचा शिलालेख आणि कुडाळ प्रांताचा प्राचीन इतिहास - अ. ब. वालावलकर, १९३२
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Original: The Poladha ( alternately Polada, Fuladi, Puladi) are a Hazara tribe found in Afghanistan, of the Southern branch of Hazara.
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Original: The Poladha, (alternatively Polada, Fuladi , Puladi) () is a tribe of Hazara found in Afghanistan, of the Southern branch of Hazara.
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Original: The Poladha , (alternatively Polada, Fouladi , Puladi) () is a tribe of Hazara found in Afghanistan, of the Southern branch of Hazara.
Revised: The Fouladi , (alternatively Polada, Fouladi , Puladi) () is a tribe of Hazara found in Afghanistan, of the Southern branch of Hazara.
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Original: The Poladha , (alternatively Polada, Fouladi , Puladi) () is a tribe of Hazara found in Afghanistan, of the Southern branch of Hazara.
Revised: The Poladha , (alternatively Polada, Poladha , Puladi) () is a tribe of Hazara found in Afghanistan, of the Southern branch of Hazara.
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Original: The Dai Chopan  are a Hazara tribe , found in Afghanistan.
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Original: The Dai Chopan  are a Hazara tribe , found in Afghanistan.
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Original:  Daichopan are the descendants of Amir Chopan, a Hazara chieftain and whose grave is at Grishik, helmand provence .
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hazara tribes Hazara people References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Hazara people Category:Hazara trib
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Original:  DaiChopan is also a sub tribe of Uruzganis and the district with the same name is in Zabul Province.
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Original:  Daichopan are the descendants of Amir Chopan, a Hazara chieftain and whose grave is at Grishik, Helmand Province  
Revised:  Daichopan are the descendants of Amir Chopan, a Hazara chieftain and whose grave is at Grishik, Helmand Province . 
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Original: The Dai Chopan () are a Hazara tribe found in Afghanistan.
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Original: The Dai Chopan () are a tribe of Hazara people found in Afghanistan.
Revised: The Dai Chopan () are a tribe of Hazara people live in Afghanistan.
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Original:  They are generally numbered among the eight overarching Hazara tribes , but not among the five "original tribes" . Together with the Dai Khitai, they form the Uruzgani tribe.
Revised:  They are generally numbered among the eight overarching Hazara tribes . Together with the Dai Khitai, they form the Uruzgani tribe.
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Original:  Daichopan are the descendants of Amir Chopan, a Hazara chieftain and whose grave is at Grishik, Helmand Province.
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Original: The Dai Chopan () are a tribe of Hazara people  live in Afghanistan.
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Original:  Dai chopan are the descendants of Amir Chopan, a Hazara chieftain and whose grave is at Grishik , Helmand Province.
Revised:  Dai chopan are the descendants of Amir Chopan, a Hazara chieftain and whose grave is at Grishk , Helmand Province.
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Original:  Dai Chopan are the descendants of Amir Chopan, a Hazara chieftain and whose grave is at Grishk, Helmand Province . Clash between Taliban and the government June 2019 Years had been going and not much has been said about the Dai Chupan tribe.
Revised:  Dai Chopan are the descendants of Amir Chopan, a Hazara chieftain and whose grave is at Grishk, Helmand Province Clash between Taliban and the government June 2019 Years had been going and not much has been said about the Dai Chupan tribe.
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Original: The Battle of Uruzgan was fought in 1893 CE between  the Hazara ethnic group and the Afghans .
Revised: The Battle of Uruzgan was fought in 1893 CE between the Hazara ethnic group of Afghanistan .
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Original:  They Uruzgani refugees migrated to Iran and British India (Quetta).
Revised:  Some Uruzgani refugees migrated to Iran and British India (Quetta).
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Original:  Thereafter, on Hazara defeat, the Hazaras of the Uruzgani tribe were uprouted from Uruzganby Abdur Rahman Khan and Pashtun tribes were resettled in Uruzgan . Some Uruzgani refugees migrated to Iran and British India (Quetta).
Revised:  Thereafter, on Hazara defeat, the Hazaras of the Uruzgani tribe migrated from Uruzgan . Some Uruzgani refugees migrated to Iran and British India (Quetta).
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Original:  In 1901, Amir Habibullah Khan granted amenesty to the migrated Hazaras and asked them to return . Some returning Uruzgani Hazaras were then resettled in Afghan Turkistan and Balkh Province, but were not allowed to return to Uruzgan .
Revised:  In 1901, Amir Habibullah Khan granted amenesty to the migrated Hazaras and asked them to return .
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Original:  In 1901, Amir Habibullah Khan after a successfull Hazara insurgency granted amnesty to the migrated Hazaras and asked them to return.
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Original:  In 1901, Amir Habibullah Khan after a successful Hazara insurgency granted amnesty to the migrated Hazaras and asked them to return  .
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Original: Clare Brewcastle Brown is a British investigative journalist.
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Original:  In December 2011, she was featured on Canadian Global News TV on a programme entitled "Family Trees" which highlighted the Taib family property company SAKTO Corporation in Canada.
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Original: Clare Rewcastle Brown is a British investigative journalist.
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Original:  In December 2011, she was featured on Canadian Global News TV on a programme entitled "Family Trees " which highlighted the Taib family property company Sakto Corporation in Canada.
Revised:  In December 2011, she was featured on Canadian Global News TV on a programme entitled Family Trees which highlighted the Taib family property company Sakto Corporation in Canada.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A geographical cluster is different from a high concentration as it is generally second order, involving the factoring in of the distribution of something else.
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Original: A geographical cluster is a localised anomaly, usually an excess of something given the distribution or variation of something else.
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Original:  Written by Lincoln Barnett, The World We Live In spanned a diverse range of topics concerning planet Earth and universe, and employed the talents of countless artists and photographers .
Revised:  Written by Lincoln Barnett, The World We Live In spanned a diverse range of topics concerning planet Earth and universe, and employed the talents of artists and photographers .
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Original:  These included, among others, cameramen Alfred Eisenstaedt and Fritz Goro , and artists Rudolph Zallinger and Chesley Bonestell.
Revised:  These included, among others, cameramen Alfred Eisenstaedt and Fritz Goro and artists Rudolph Zallinger and Chesley Bonestell.
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Original:  Each of the chapters sported art and photos, often presented in large gatefolds which showed two sides of a scenario .
Revised:  Each chapter was assigned to a reporter, who was granted eight months to research the subject, organize the data, and oversee the photography and artwork. This opportunity to travel, learn, and explore on company expense was known informally as a "Luce fellowship" .
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Original:  Biophony is a term introduced by soundscape ecologist, Bernie Krause, who in 1998, first began to express the soundscape in terms of its acoustic sources.
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Original:  Biophony (also known as the niche hypothesis) consists of the Greek prefix, bio, meaning life, and the suffix, phon, meaning sound, is a neologism used to describe the collective sound that vocalizing animals create in each given environment.
Revised:  Biophony consists of the Greek prefix, bio, meaning life, and the suffix, phon, meaning sound, is a neologism used to describe the collective sound that vocalizing animals create in each given environment.
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Original:  Further reading Bryan C. Pijanowski, Luis J. Villanueva-Rivera, Sarah L. Dumyahn, Almo Farina, Bernie L. Krause, Brian M. Napoletano, Stuart H. Gage, and Nadia Pieretti,Soundscape Ecology: The Science of Sound in the Landscape, BioScience, March, 2011, vol. 61 no. 3, 203–216 Bernie Krause, Stuart H. Gage, Wooyeong Joo, Measuring and interpreting the temporal variability in the soundscape at four places in Sequoia National Park, Landscape Ecology, DOI 10.1007/s10980-011-9639-6, August 2011
Revised:  Further reading Bryan C. Pijanowski, Luis J. Villanueva-Rivera, Sarah L. Dumyahn, Almo Farina, Bernie L. Krause, Brian M. Napoletano, Stuart H. Gage, and Nadia Pieretti,Soundscape Ecology: The Science of Sound in the Landscape, BioScience, March, 2011, vol. 61 no. 3, 203–216 Bernie Krause, Stuart H. Gage, Wooyeong Joo, Measuring and interpreting the temporal variability in the soundscape at four places in Sequoia National Park, Landscape Ecology, DOI 10.1007/s10980-011-9639-6, Aug. 2011.
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Original:  The soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources , as coined by Gage and Krause  to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park: Geophony, from the Greek prefix, geo, meaning earth-related, and phon, meaning sound, is a neologism used to describe one of three possible sonic components of a soundscape.
Revised:  The soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources ( as coined by Gage and Krause to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park: Geophony, from the Greek prefix, geo, meaning earth-related, and phon, meaning sound, is a neologism used to describe one of three possible sonic components of a soundscape.
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Original:  The soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources , as coined by Gage and Krause  to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park: Geophony, from the Greek prefix, geo, meaning earth-related, and phon, meaning sound, is a neologism used to describe one of three possible sonic components of a soundscape.
Revised:  The soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources , as coined by Gage and Krause ) to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park: Geophony, from the Greek prefix, geo, meaning earth-related, and phon, meaning sound, is a neologism used to describe one of three possible sonic components of a soundscape.
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Original:  Biophony is a term introduced by Bernie Krause, who in 1998, first began to express the soundscape in terms of its acoustic sources.
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Original:  According to academic to Krause the soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources (as coined by Gage and Krause) to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park :
Revised:  Krause sees the soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources (as coined by Gage and Krause) to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park :
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Original:  According to academic to Krause the soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources (as coined by Gage and Krause) to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park :
Revised:  According to academic to Krause the soundscape of a given region as the sum of three separate sound sources (as coined by Gage and Krause) to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park :
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Original:  According to academic to Krause the soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources (as coined by Gage and Krause) to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park :
Revised:  According to academic to Krause the soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources (as described by Gage and Krause) to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park :
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Original:  According to academic to Krause the soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources (as coined by Gage and Krause) to describe certain soundscape phenomena recorded as part of a bioacoustic study in 2001–2002 commissioned by the National Park Service, and done in Sequoia/King's Canyon National Park :
Revised:  According to academic to Krause the soundscape of a given region can be viewed as the sum of three separate sound sources (as coined by Gage and Krause) defined as follows :
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Original:  the timing of these vocalization events may have evolved to minimize temporal overlap with other elements of the soundscape . Contributions from other fields As an academic discipline, soundscape ecology shares some characteristics with other fields of inquiry but is also distinct from them in significant ways.
Revised:  the timing of these vocalization events may have evolved to minimize temporal overlap with other elements of the soundscape Contributions from other fields As an academic discipline, soundscape ecology shares some characteristics with other fields of inquiry but is also distinct from them in significant ways.
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Original:  Orlando City Signs Valentino He made his professional debut on 14 May 2011, coming on as a second-half substitute in a 1–0 win over the Pittsburgh Riverhounds.
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Original:  Orlando City Chin playing for Orlando City in 2014 Chin turned professional when he signed with Orlando City of the USL Professional Division in 2011.
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Original:  He was released upon the conclusion of the 2014 season, a casualty of the club's transition to Major League Soccer.
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Original:  He was released upon the conclusion of the 2014 season, a casualty of the club's transition to Major League Soccer.
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