wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   2008 Research @ Intel Day , to showcase the conceptual innovations including visual computing, wireless, health care, environment, and life sciences , reflecting areas where the company  is investing some of its annual $6 billion in research , held at Computer History Museum in Mountain View, California last Wednesday .
Revised:  2008 Research @ Intel Day , to showcase the conceptual innovations including visual computing, wireless, health care, environment, and life sciences , reflecting areas where the company is investing some of its annual $6 billion in research , held at Computer History Museum in Mountain View, California .
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Original:  Not only topics related to mobile computing, green technology, WiMAX and wireless networking, solutions for health care with SHIMMER and BioMOBIUS technology, an intelligent identification robot named "BarKeep" , and Platform Power Management, were showcased there.
Revised:  Technology related to mobile computing, green technology, WiMAX and wireless networking, solutions for health care with SHIMMER and BioMOBIUS technology, an intelligent identification robot named "BarKeep" , and Platform Power Management, were showcased there.
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Original:  Not only topics related to mobile computing, green technology, WiMAX and wireless networking, solutions for health care with SHIMMER and BioMOBIUS technology, an intelligent identification robot named "BarKeep" , and Platform Power Management, were showcased there.
Revised:  Not only topics related to mobile computing, green technology, WiMAX and wireless networking, solutions for healthcare with SHIMMER and BioMOBIUS technology, an intelligent identification robot named "BarKeep" , and Platform Power Management, were showcased there.
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Original:  Significantly in the opening keynote , Justin Rattner, Intel Senior Fellow and Corporate Vice President and director of Intel's Corporate Technology Group, introduced the history of microprocessors and said: "Parallel Computing will be a critical factor on programming for the best experience to users.
Revised:  In the keynote address , Justin Rattner, Intel Senior Fellow and Corporate Vice President and director of Intel's Corporate Technology Group, introduced the history of microprocessors and said: "Parallel Computing will be a critical factor on programming for the best experience to users.
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Original: The gas crisis in Western Australia deepens with more people being stood .
Revised: The gas crisis in Western Australia deepens with more business standing people down without pay or forcing them to take leave .
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Original:  In the Federal parliament today Resources Minister Martin Ferguson raised the prospect of activating the Liquid Fuel Emergency Act, this act enables the government to take control of all aspects of fuel supply.
Revised:  In the Federal parliament today Resources Minister Martin Ferguson raised the prospect of activating the Liquid Fuel Emergency Act, 
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Original:  Mr Ferguson said "During such a situation, I can control the production, transfer and stock levels of crude and liquid fuel...
Revised:  saying "During such a situation, I can control the production, transfer and stock levels of crude and liquid fuel...
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Original: The gas crisis in Western Australia deepens with more business standing people down without pay or forcing them to take leave .
Revised: The gas crisis in Western Australia deepens with more business standing people down without pay .
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Original:  Businesses have been instructed to turn off non-essential usage including reducing the number of lifts in operation and limiting lighting, with domestic customers also being ask to reduce energy use.
Revised:  Businesses have been instructed to turn off non-essential items including limiting the number of lifts in operation and limiting lighting, with domestic customers also being ask to reduce energy use.
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Original:  Businesses have been instructed to turn off non-essential usage including reducing the number of lifts in operation and limiting lighting, with domestic customers also being ask to reduce energy use.
Revised:  Businesses have been instructed to turn off non-essential usage including reducing the number of lifts and reduced lighting, domestic customers are urged to reduce energy use.
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Original:  Supplies were affected after a fire at Apache's Vanarus Island refinery which supplied 30\% of the states natural gas requirements.
Revised:  Supplies were interupted after a fire at Apache's Vanarus Island refinery which supplied 30\% of the states natural gas requirements.
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Original: The gas crisis in Western Australia deepens with more business standing people down without pay.
Revised: The gas crisis in Western Australia continues to deepen with more business standing people down without pay.
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Original:  Businesses have been instructed to turn off non-essential items including limiting the number of lifts and reduced lighting , domestic customers are urged to reduce energy use.
Revised:  Businesses have been instructed to turn off non-essential items including limiting the number of lifts and reduced lighting ; domestic customers are urged to reduce energy use.
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Original:  WA Premier Alan Carpenter called on Western Australians to cut back on energy usagesaying that situation can be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring Western Australians that the crisis will be short with Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
Revised:  Western Australians Premier Alan Carpenter called on Western Australians to cut back on energy usagesaying that situation can be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring Western Australians that the crisis will be short with Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
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Original:  WA Premier Alan Carpenter called on Western Australians to cut back on energy usagesaying that situation can be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring Western Australians that the crisis will be short with Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
Revised:  WA Premier Alan Carpenter called on his constituents to reduce energy usage, saying that the situation could be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring Western Australians that the crisis will be short with Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
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Original:  WA Premier Alan Carpenter called on Western Australians to cut back on energy usagesaying that situation can be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring Western Australians that the crisis will be short with Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
Revised:  WA Premier Alan Carpenter called on Western Australians to cut back on energy usagesaying that situation can be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring Western Australians that the crisis will be short , with the Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
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Original:  Supplies were interupted after a fire at Apache's Vanarus Island refinery  which supplied 30\% of the states natural gas requirements.
Revised:  Supplies were interupted after a fire at Apache's Vanarus Island refinery , which supplied 30\% of the states natural gas requirements.
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Original: Western Australians Premier Alan Carpenter called on his constituents to reduce energy usage, saying that the situation could be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring Western Australians that the crisis will be short, with the Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
Revised: Western Australians Premier Alan Carpenter called on all Western Australians to reduce energy usage, saying that the situation could be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring Western Australians that the crisis will be short, with the Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
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Original: Western Australians Premier Alan Carpenter called on all Western Australians to reduce energy usage, saying that the situation could be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring Western Australians that the crisis will be short, with the Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
Revised: Western Australians Premier Alan Carpenter called on all Western Australians to reduce energy usage, saying that the situation could be managed with on going co-operation, while reassuring the everyone that the crisis will be short, with the Apache Corporation expected to begin partial operations in two months.
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Original:   Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week that demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that its critical that all consumers limits its energy usage.
Revised:  An Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week that demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that its critical that all consumers limits its energy usage.
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Original:   Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week that demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that its critical that all consumers limits its energy usage.
Revised:  Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week that demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that it's critical that all consumers limits its energy usage.
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Original: The gas crisis in Western Australia continues to deepen with more business standing people down without pay.
Revised: The gas crisis in Western Australia continues to deepen with more businesses standing people down without pay.
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Original:  domestic customers are  urged to reduce energy use.
Revised:  domestic customers are also urged to reduce energy use.
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Original:  Supplies were interupted after a fire at Apache's Vanarus Island refinery, which supplied 30\% of the states natural gas requirements.
Revised:  Supplies were interrupted after a fire at Apache's Vanarus Island refinery, which supplied 30\% of the states natural gas requirements.
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Original:  Supplies were interupted after a fire at Apache's Vanarus Island refinery, which supplied 30\% of the states natural gas requirements.
Revised:  Supplies were interupted after a fire at Apache's Vanarus Island refinery, which supplied 30\% of the state's natural gas requirements.
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Original:  An Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week that demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that it 's critical that all consumers limits its energy usage.
Revised:  An Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that it 's critical that all consumers limits its energy usage.
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Original:  An Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week that demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that it 's critical that all consumers limits its energy usage.
Revised:  An Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week that demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that it is critical that all consumers limits its energy usage.
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Original:  An Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week that demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that it 's critical that all consumers limits its energy usage.
Revised:  An Alinta spokesman has said that with the expected cold weather during the next week that demand will put further pressure on supplies, advising that it 's critical that all consumers limit energy usage.
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Original:  While suggest small business ;
Revised:  While suggesting small businesses ;
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Original:  Elián González was 1 of 18,000 people who joined Cuba's Young Communist Union.
Revised:  Elián González was among the 18,000 people who joined Cuba's Young Communist Union.
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Original:  Associated Press is reporting that Elián González was among the 18,000 youths who joined Cuba's Young Communist Union  . Juventud Rebelde, the communist youth newspaper, quoted González as saying , that he will never let down ex-president Fidel Castro and his brother, Raul Castro.
Revised: The Associated Press is reporting that Elián González was among the 18,000 youths who joined Cuba's Young Communist Union . Juventud Rebelde, the communist youth newspaper, quoted González as saying , that he will never let down ex-president Fidel Castro and his brother, Raul Castro.
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Original:  Associated Press is reporting that Elián González was among the 18,000 youths who joined Cuba's Young Communist Union  . Juventud Rebelde, the communist youth newspaper, quoted González as saying , that he will never let down ex-president Fidel Castro and his brother, Raul Castro.
Revised:  Associated Press is reporting that Elián González was among the 18,000 youths who joined Cuba's Young Communist Union . Juventud Rebelde, the communist youth newspaper, quoted González as saying that he will never let down ex-president Fidel Castro and his brother, Raul Castro.
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Original:  Elián González was the boy who was the centre of an international custody battle 8 years ago.
Revised:  An international custody battle 8 years ago.
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Original:  Elián had survived a boating accident when him and his mother fled Cuba to go to the United States.
Revised:  The boy had survived a boating accident when him and his mother fled Cuba to go to the United States.
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Original:  Elián had survived a boating accident when him and his mother fled Cuba to go to the United States.
Revised:  Elián had survived a boating accident when he and his mother fled Cuba to go to the United States.
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Original:  His mother didn't survive the accident.
Revised:  His mother did not survive the accident.
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Original: The pilot was taken  to Queen's Medical Centre in Nottingham for treatment for spinal injuries by air ambulance . Local resident Vic Harrison speaking to the BBC said, "I thought he didn't stand a chance, but I looked up and saw the parachute of the pilot.
Revised: The pilot was taken by air ambulance to Queen's Medical Centre in Nottingham for treatment for spinal injuries by air ambulance . Local resident Vic Harrison speaking to the BBC said, "I thought he didn't stand a chance, but I looked up and saw the parachute of the pilot.
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Original: The pilot was taken  to Queen's Medical Centre in Nottingham for treatment for spinal injuries by air ambulance . Local resident Vic Harrison speaking to the BBC said, "I thought he didn't stand a chance, but I looked up and saw the parachute of the pilot.
Revised: The pilot was taken to Queen's Medical Centre in Nottingham for treatment for spinal injuries . Local resident Vic Harrison speaking to the BBC said, "I thought he didn't stand a chance, but I looked up and saw the parachute of the pilot.
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Original: The pilot was taken  to Queen's Medical Centre in Nottingham for treatment for spinal injuries by air ambulance . Local resident Vic Harrison speaking to the BBC said, "I thought he didn't stand a chance, but I looked up and saw the parachute of the pilot.
Revised: The pilot was taken to Queen's Medical Centre in Nottingham for treatment for spinal injuries by air ambulance . Local resident Vic Harrison spoke to the BBC said, "I thought he didn't stand a chance, but I looked up and saw the parachute of the pilot.
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Original: The pilot was taken  to Queen's Medical Centre in Nottingham for treatment for spinal injuries by air ambulance . Local resident Vic Harrison speaking to the BBC said, "I thought he didn't stand a chance, but I looked up and saw the parachute of the pilot.
Revised: The pilot was taken to Queen's Medical Centre in Nottingham for treatment for spinal injuries by air ambulance . Local resident Vic Harrison speaking to the BBC about the incident: "I thought he didn't stand a chance, but I looked up and saw the parachute of the pilot.
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Original: A Royal Navy pilot has safely ejected from his Harrier GR7 aircraft moments before it crashed in a field near the small village of Ashwell in the country of Rutland in England.
Revised: A Royal Navy pilot has safely ejected from his Harrier GR7 aircraft moments before it crashed in a field near the small village of Ashwell in the county of Rutland in England.
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Original:  These chemicals, responsible for the characteric smell of new vinyl, may cause damage to kidneys, the liver and the central nervous systems, respiratory problems, nausea, headaches and loss off coordination, according to the report.
Revised:  These chemicals, responsible for the characteristic smell of new vinyl, may cause damage to kidneys, the liver and the central nervous systems, respiratory problems, nausea, headaches and loss off coordination, according to the report.
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Original: The Canadian Environmental Law Assocation and  Canadian organization Environmental Defence jointly conducted a study that was released to the public on Thursday, saying that chemicals released by new vinyl curtains may pose a significant health risk.
Revised: The Canadian Environmental Law Assocation and the Canadian organization Environmental Defence jointly conducted a study that was released to the public on Thursday, saying that chemicals released by new vinyl curtains may pose a significant health risk.
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Original:  they were purchased from American stores including Bed Bath and Beyond, Kmart, Sears, Target and Wal-Mart.
Revised:  they were purchased from American stores including Bed Bath Beyond, Kmart, Sears, Target and Wal-Mart.
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Original: The study noted that many shower curtains contain more than 100 volate organic compounds (VOCs), phthalates and organotins, some of which may be released into the air when first taken from a package.
Revised: The study noted that many shower curtains contain more than 100 volatile organic compounds (VOCs), phthalates and organotins, some of which may be released into the air when first taken from a package.
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Original:  She noted that, "as far as we know, nobody's ever been harmed by a shower curtain (except for suicidal maniacs) ."
Revised:  She noted that, "as far as we know, nobody's ever been harmed by a shower curtain ."
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Original: U.S. President George Bush and British President Gordon Brown have promised new sanctions on Iran if the Gulf country continues to enrich weapons-grade uranium.
Revised: U.S. President George Bush and British Prime Minister Gordon Brown have promised new sanctions on Iran if the Gulf country continues to enrich weapons-grade uranium.
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Original: U.S. President George  Bush and British Prime Minister Gordon Brown have promised new sanctions on Iran if the Gulf country continues to enrich weapons-grade uranium.
Revised: U.S. President George W. Bush and British Prime Minister Gordon Brown have promised new sanctions on Iran if the Gulf country continues to enrich weapons-grade uranium.
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Original:  The flooding in Iowa has resulted in damage to buildings, infrastructure and farms, and governor Chet Culver's office has estimate that 36,000 people have been made homeless.
Revised:  The flooding in Iowa has resulted in damage to buildings, infrastructure and farms, and governor Chet Culver's office has estimated that 36,000 people have been made homeless.
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Original:   Premier Carpenter said " ...   
Revised:  Premier Carpenter said " This is a serious situation which affects us all," 
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Original:  A representative from the Property Council of WA, which represents commercial property owners has said that "we are going to have to get used to cold offices and dimly lit shopping centres  
Revised:  A representative from the Property Council of WA, which represents commercial property owners has said that "we are going to have to get used to cold offices and dimly lit shopping centres " 
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Original: BHP Billington has brought forward upgrades to its nickel refinery in Kambalda and diverted its gas allocation to keeping the Worsley Alumina refinery operating.
Revised: BHP Billiton has brought forward upgrades to its nickel refinery in Kambalda and diverted its gas allocation to keeping the Worsley Alumina refinery operating.
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Original: Australian economic growth forecast for 2008/09 have been reduced to 2.75\% as the impact of the gas crisis ripples through the economy.
Revised: Australian economic growth forecast for 2008/09 has been reduced to 2.75\% as the impact of the gas crisis ripples through the economy.
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Original:  Federal Resources Minister Martin Ferguson said today that disruption to economic activity is expected as Western Australian companies layoff thousands of works with mining and industrial companies forced to cut back production.
Revised:  Federal Resources Minister Martin Ferguson said today that disruption to economic activity is expected as Western Australian companies layoff thousands of workers with mining and industrial companies forced to cut back production.
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Original:  BHP has said that it 'll continue to accept ore from independent mining operators in the area inline with current contracts.
Revised:  BHP has said that it will continue to accept ore from independent mining operators in the area inline with current contracts.
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Original:  Australia's economy is expecting turbulence as mining companies come under pressure to continue to supply China's demand for materials from Western Australia, combined with growing inflation rising gold and commodity prices
Revised:  Economists expect continuing turbulence as mining companies come under pressure to continue to supply China's demand for materials from Western Australia, combined with growing inflation rising gold and commodity prices
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Original:  My opinion is that their amounts were utterly unimportant and insignificant.  
Revised:  My opinion is that their amounts were utterly unimportant and insignificant. " 
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Original: A team of scientists from the United States, United Kingdom and the Netherlands have determined that chemicals in a meteorite that form the building blocks of DNA and RNA  had formed before the meteorite fell to Earth.
Revised: A team of scientists from the United States, United Kingdom and the Netherlands have determined that chemicals that form the building blocks of DNA and RNA had formed before the meteorite fell to Earth.
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Original: In his exchange on the Sunday morning talkshow , "Some want only to teach intelligent design, some only want to teach evolution.
Revised: In his exchange on the Sunday morning talk show , "Some want only to teach intelligent design, some only want to teach evolution.
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Original:  Whereas, evolution is overwhelmingly accepted by scientists as the foundation for modern biology.
Revised:  Whereas, evolution is overwhelmingly accepted by scientists as the "central unifying concept" for modern biology.
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