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Original:  The US military has defended it's actions, saying that it has not breached prisoners  rights under the Geneva Conventions, and is acting to process current detainees as quickly as possible
Revised:  The US military has defended its actions, saying that it has not breached prisoners rights under the Geneva Conventions, and is acting to process current detainees as quickly as possible
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Original:  The US military has defended it's actions, saying that it has not breached prisoners  rights under the Geneva Conventions, and is acting to process current detainees as quickly as possible
Revised:  The US military has defended it's actions, saying that it has not breached prisoners ' rights under the Geneva Conventions, and is acting to process current detainees as quickly as possible
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Original:  He said that the prisoners were denied due legal process  other rights guaranteed under international law.
Revised:  He said that the prisoners were denied due legal process and other rights guaranteed under international law.
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Original: 100px|Sky News Logo 180px|The late Bob Friend, face of Sky News for 14 years He retired from Sky News through ill health, his last broadcast being in 2003.
Revised:  180px|The late Bob Friend, face of Sky News for 14 years He retired from Sky News through ill health, his last broadcast being in 2003.
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Original:  Bob's death from a malignant Brain Tumour was announced this morning on Sky News' website.
Revised:  Bob's death from a malignant brain tumour was announced this morning on Sky News' website.
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Original:  Thomas Haugaard Jensen, an economist of Copenhagen's Svenska Handelsbanken, said of the Icelandic economy  " This looks like a total collapse," and that he predicts it will take several years before Iceland's economy recovers enough for it to return to growth.
Revised:  Thomas Haugaard Jensen, an economist of Copenhagen's Svenska Handelsbanken, indicated the Icelandic economy " This looks like a total collapse," and that he predicts it will take several years before Iceland's economy recovers enough for it to return to growth.
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Original:  Thomas Haugaard Jensen, an economist of Copenhagen's Svenska Handelsbanken, said of the Icelandic economy  " This looks like a total collapse," and that he predicts it will take several years before Iceland's economy recovers enough for it to return to growth.
Revised:  Thomas Haugaard Jensen, an economist of Copenhagen's Svenska Handelsbanken, said of the Icelandic economy " total collapse," and that he predicts it will take several years before Iceland's economy recovers enough for it to return to growth.
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Original:  Thomas Haugaard Jensen, an economist of Copenhagen's Svenska Handelsbanken, said of the Icelandic economy  " This looks like a total collapse," and that he predicts it will take several years before Iceland's economy recovers enough for it to return to growth.
Revised:  Thomas Haugaard Jensen, an economist of Copenhagen's Svenska Handelsbanken, said of the Icelandic economy " This looks like a total collapse," and predicted it will take several years before Iceland's economy recovers enough for it to return to growth.
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Original:  Kaupthing themselves requested the takeover, which leaves most of the nation's banking sector under state control.
Revised:  Kaupthing itself requested the national takeover, which leaves most of the nation's banking sector under state control.
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Original:  The bank's board then all resigned and left the authorities in control of the bank.
Revised:  The bank's board have resigned and left the authorities in control of the bank.
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Original:  Thomas Haugaard Jensen, an economist of Copenhagen's Svenska Handelsbanken , indicated the Icelandic economy seems to be at the verge of a "total collapse," and predicted it will take several years before Iceland's economy recovers enough for it to return to growth.
Revised:  Thomas Haugaard Jensen, an economist of Svenska Handelsbanken in Copenhagen , indicated the Icelandic economy seems to be at the verge of a "total collapse," and predicted it will take several years before Iceland's economy recovers enough for it to return to growth.
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Original:  The road reopened after police convinced the woman to come down at 1725 BST  
Revised:  The road reopened after police convinced the woman to come down at 1725 BST . 
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Original:  U.S. President George Bush is set to meet with G-7 finance ministers at the White House on Saturday  
Revised:  U.S. President George Bush is set to meet with G-7 finance ministers at the White House on Saturday . 
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Original: Image:Strauss-Kahn, Dominique (official portrait 2008).jpg|Dominique Strauss-Kahn made his comments at  press briefing.
Revised: Image:Strauss-Kahn, Dominique (official portrait 2008).jpg|Dominique Strauss-Kahn made his comments at a press briefing.
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Original: ]] Dominique Strauss-Kahn, Managing Director of the IMF, says nations must work together to avert a global recession and warns there is "no domestic solution" to the crisis.
Revised: ]] Dominique Strauss-Kahn, Managing Director of the IMF, stressed nations must work together to avert a global recession and warns there is "no domestic solution" to the crisis.
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Original:  He says this week's coordinated interest rate cuts around the world are a good example of the international cooperation needed to restore faltering economies.
Revised:  He also said this week's coordinated interest rate cuts around the world are a good example of the international cooperation needed to restore faltering economies.
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Original:  Strauss-Khan says the IMF also activated an emergency program Wednesday that allows the fund to provide loans more easily and quickly to emerging countries in economic trouble.
Revised:  Furthermore, he announced the IMF has activated an emergency program Wednesday that allows the fund to provide loans more easily and quickly to emerging countries in economic trouble.
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Original:  Iceland has nationalize all banks , most recently, Kaupthing Bank.
Revised:  Iceland has been forced to nationalize all of her banks and , most recently, Kaupthing Bank.
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Original:  The IMF chief made the remarks in Washington D.C.
Revised:  The IMF chief made these remarks in Washington D.C.
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Original:   Thursday, as top officials from IMF nations and the G-7 industrialized countries are gathering for meetings on economic issues.
Revised:  on Thursday, as top officials from IMF nations and the G-7 industrialized countries are gathering for meetings on economic issues.
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Original:  ]] When 24-year-old Andrew Vactor of Urbana, Ohio  was convicted of violating the city's noise ordinance, Judge Susan J. Fornof-Lippencott offered to reduce the normal fine of $US150 to $35 if he agreed to listen to 20 hours of classical music.
Revised:  ]] When 24-year-old Andrew Vactor of Urbana, Ohio , United States was convicted of violating the city's noise ordinance, Judge Susan J. Fornof-Lippencott offered to reduce the normal fine of $US150 to $35 if he agreed to listen to 20 hours of classical music.
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Original:  "I didn’t have the time to deal with that, ” he said.
Revised:  "I didn’t have the time to deal with that, " he said.
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Original:  “ I just decided to pay the fine.
Revised:  " I just decided to pay the fine.
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Original:  ]] When 24-year-old Andrew Vactor of Urbana, Ohio, United States was convicted of violating the city's noise ordinance, Judge Susan J. Fornof-Lippencott offered to reduce the normal fine of $US150 to $ 35 if he agreed to listen to 20 hours of classical music.
Revised:  ]] When 24-year-old Andrew Vactor of Urbana, Ohio, United States was convicted of violating the city's noise ordinance, Judge Susan J. Fornof-Lippencott offered to reduce the normal fine of US$150 to $ 35 if he agreed to listen to 20 hours of classical music.
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Original: Although Judge Fornof-Lippencott hopes these sentences "might enlighten defendants", Vactor denied that musical taste paid a role in his decision to pay the full fine.
Revised: Although Judge Fornof-Lippencott hopes these sentences "might enlighten defendants", Vactor denied that musical taste played a role in his decision to pay the full fine.
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Original:  Fifteen minutes into the sentence the rap music fan changed his mind and paid the full fine in order to end his probation. noicon|The first movements of Beethoven's Piano Sonata No. 28, Op. 101 The sentence would have included selections from Ludwig van Beethoven, Frédéric Chopin, Johann Sebastian Bach, and Claude Debussy.
Revised:  Fifteen minutes into the sentence the rap music fan changed his mind and paid the full fine in order to end his probation. noicon|The first movement of Beethoven's Piano Sonata No. 28, Op. 101 The sentence would have included selections from Ludwig van Beethoven, Frédéric Chopin, Johann Sebastian Bach, and Claude Debussy.
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Original: 20:15, 09 October, 2008 (UTC) Stock markets across the world have fallen dramatically as worries that recent government moves might not prevent a global recession.
Revised:  Stock markets across the world have fallen dramatically as worries that recent government moves might not prevent a global recession.
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Original:  Also, Germany's Chancellor Angela Merkel did not rule out nationalizing banks  
Revised:  Also, Germany's Chancellor Angela Merkel did not rule out nationalizing banks . 
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Original: Stock markets across the world have fallen dramatically as worries that recent government moves might not prevent a global recession.
Revised: Stock markets across the world fell dramatically this week on worries that recent government moves might not prevent a global recession.
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Original:  The largest drop was with the the Dow Jones (DJIA), which fell 678 points , or more than 7.3\% , to below 9,000 to close at 8,579.19.
Revised:  The largest drop was with the Dow Jones (DJIA), which fell 678 points , or more than 7.3\% , to below 9,000 to close at 8,579.19.
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Original:  The largest drop was with the the Dow Jones (DJIA), which fell 678 points , or more than 7.3\% , to below 9,000 to close at 8,579.19.
Revised:  The largest drop was with the the Dow Jones (DJIA), which fell 678 points or more than 7.3\% , to below 9,000 to close at 8,579.19.
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Original:  The largest drop was with the the Dow Jones (DJIA), which fell 678 points , or more than 7.3\% , to below 9,000 to close at 8,579.19.
Revised:  The largest drop was with the the Dow Jones (DJIA), which fell 678 points , or more than 7.3\% to below 9,000 to close at 8,579.19.
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Original:  The largest drop was with the the Dow Jones (DJIA), which fell 678 points , or more than 7.3\% , to below 9,000 to close at 8,579.19.
Revised:  The largest drop was with the the Dow Jones (DJIA), which fell 678 points , or more than 7.3\% , to below 9,000 , closing at 8,579.19.
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Original:  The index has fallen over 2,000 points in the past nine days to reach its lowest level since 2003.
Revised:  The index fell over 2,000 points in the past nine days to reach its lowest level since 2003.
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Original:  The U.S. markets opened on the positive side, but with bad news coming from several different areas such as whether or not the 700 billion USD bank bailout bill passed by the United States House of Representatives and the Senate is working or will work . Concerns over the lack of trading within the credit market is one of the main reasons for the drop.
Revised:  The U.S. markets opened on the positive side, but with bad news coming from several different areas such as uncertainty over whether the 700 billion USD bank bailout bill passed by the United States House of Representatives and the Senate is working or will work . Concerns over the lack of trading within the credit market is one of the main reasons for the drop.
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Original:  The U.S. markets opened on the positive side, but with bad news coming from several different areas such as whether or not the 700 billion USD bank bailout bill passed by the United States House of Representatives and the Senate is working or will work . Concerns over the lack of trading within the credit market is one of the main reasons for the drop.
Revised:  The U.S. markets opened on the positive side, but with bad news coming from several different areas such as whether or not the 700 billion USD bank bailout bill passed by the United States House of Representatives and the Senate will be effective . Concerns over the lack of trading within the credit market is one of the main reasons for the drop.
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Original:  The U.S. markets opened on the positive side, but with bad news coming from several different areas such as whether or not the 700 billion USD bank bailout bill passed by the United States House of Representatives and the Senate is working or will work . Concerns over the lack of trading within the credit market is one of the main reasons for the drop.
Revised:  The U.S. markets opened on the positive side, but with bad news coming from several different areas such as whether or not the 700 billion USD bank bailout bill passed by the United States House of Representatives and the Senate is working or will work . Concerns over the lack of trading within the credit market was a primary cause of the drop.
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Original:  This is the seventh straight day of markets closing in severely negative numbers.
Revised:  This was the seventh straight day of markets closing in severely negative numbers.
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Original:  One of the biggest stocks that dropped was General Motors, which lost more then 33\% of its value.
Revised:  One of the biggest stocks to drop was General Motors, which lost more then 33\% of its value.
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Original:  In the UK, the FTSE 100 dropped from a day high of 145 points to 52.9 points lower, which is a 4 year low.
Revised:  In the UK, the FTSE 100 dropped from a day high of 145 points to 52.9 points lower, at a 4 year low.
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Original:  The only major world indexes that gained any value were the Hang Seng in Hong Kong, which closed up 511.51 points or up 3.31\%, and the Russian RTS, which ended up more than 10.91\%, recovering partly from yesterday's fall  . "Markets are still sceptic with regards to the international coordination to face the problems of the financial system," explained Barclays Capital economists.
Revised:  The only major world indexes that gained any value were the Hang Seng in Hong Kong, which closed up 511.51 points or 3.31\%, and the Russian RTS, which ended up more than 10.91\%, recovering partly from yesterday's fall . "Markets are still sceptic with regards to the international coordination to face the problems of the financial system," explained Barclays Capital economists.
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Original:  The only major world indexes that gained any value were the Hang Seng in Hong Kong, which closed up 511.51 points or up 3.31\%, and the Russian RTS, which ended up more than 10.91\%, recovering partly from yesterday's fall  . "Markets are still sceptic with regards to the international coordination to face the problems of the financial system," explained Barclays Capital economists.
Revised:  The only major world indexes that gained any value were the Hang Seng in Hong Kong, which closed up 511.51 points or up 3.31\%, and the Russian RTS, which partly from yesterday's fall . "Markets are still sceptic with regards to the international coordination to face the problems of the financial system," explained Barclays Capital economists.
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Original:  The only major world indexes that gained any value were the Hang Seng in Hong Kong, which closed up 511.51 points or up 3.31\%, and the Russian RTS, which ended up more than 10.91\%, recovering partly from yesterday's fall  . "Markets are still sceptic with regards to the international coordination to face the problems of the financial system," explained Barclays Capital economists.
Revised:  The only major world indexes that gained any value were the Hang Seng in Hong Kong, which closed up 511.51 points or up 3.31\%, and the Russian RTS, which ended up more than 10.91\%, recovering partly from yesterday's fall with a 10.91\% increase . "Markets are still sceptic with regards to the international coordination to face the problems of the financial system," explained Barclays Capital economists.
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Original:  The only major world indexes that gained any value were the Hang Seng in Hong Kong, which closed up 511.51 points or up 3.31\%, and the Russian RTS, which ended up more than 10.91\%, recovering partly from yesterday's fall  . "Markets are still sceptic with regards to the international coordination to face the problems of the financial system," explained Barclays Capital economists.
Revised:  The only major world indexes that gained any value were the Hang Seng in Hong Kong, which closed up 511.51 points or up 3.31\%, and the Russian RTS, which ended up more than 10.91\%, recovering partly from yesterday's fall . "Markets are still skeptic with regards to the international coordination to face the problems of the financial system," explained Barclays Capital economists.
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Original:  Thus, they predicted , stocks will continue to be volatile for longer .
Revised:  They predicted stocks would continue to be volatile for longer .
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Original:  Thus, they predicted , stocks will continue to be volatile for longer .
Revised:  Thus, they predicted , stocks will continue to be volatile .
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Original:  Finance ministers from the G7 will be gathering in Washington, and in the meantime the International Monetary Fund and the World Bank will be holding there autumn meetings.
Revised:  Finance ministers from the G7 will be gathering in Washington, and the International Monetary Fund and the World Bank will be holding there autumn meetings.
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Original:  Finance ministers from the G7 will be gathering in Washington, and in the meantime the International Monetary Fund and the World Bank will be holding there autumn meetings.
Revised:  Finance ministers from the G7 will be gathering in Washington, and in the meantime the International Monetary Fund and the World Bank will be holding their autumn meetings.
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Original:  Emergency rescues %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In response to the financial tsunami, the European Central Bank (ECB) opened this Thursday an unlimited emergency credit line  to stimulate liquidity in the institutions that are facing bankruptcy.
Revised:  Emergency rescues %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In response to the financial tsunami, the European Central Bank (ECB) opened an unlimited emergency credit line to stimulate liquidity in the institutions that are facing bankruptcy.
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Original:  Through six-day credits, the ECB plans aiding financially the 15 countries which are part of the Eurozone.
Revised:  Through six-day credits, the ECB plans to financially aid the 15 countries which are part of the Eurozone.
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Original:  Furthermore, it injected $100 billion dollars to the market, duplicating the figure it had originally offered.
Revised:  Furthermore, it injected $100 billion dollars into the market, duplicating the figure it had originally offered.
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Original:  Iceland had to nationalize Kaupthing Bank, the most important one in the country.
Revised:  Iceland nationalized Kaupthing Bank, the most important one in the country.
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Original:  Iceland had to nationalize Kaupthing Bank, the most important one in the country.
Revised:  Iceland had to nationalize Kaupthing Bank, the most important bank in the country.
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Original:  The Nordic state – & whose economy is highly dependent on the banking system – is handling & great financial problems after the government was forced to nationalize the three most important banks, and could have to face bankruptcy.
Revised:  The Nordic state & whose economy is highly dependent on the banking system – is handling & great financial problems after the government was forced to nationalize the three most important banks, and could have to face bankruptcy.
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Original:  The Nordic state – & whose economy is highly dependent on the banking system – is handling & great financial problems after the government was forced to nationalize the three most important banks, and could have to face bankruptcy.
Revised:  The Nordic state – & whose economy is highly dependent on the banking system & great financial problems after the government was forced to nationalize the three most important banks, and could have to face bankruptcy.
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Original:  The Nordic state – & whose economy is highly dependent on the banking system – is handling & great financial problems after the government was forced to nationalize the three most important banks, and could have to face bankruptcy.
Revised:  The Nordic state – & whose economy is highly dependent on the banking system – is handling & great financial problems after the government nationalized the three most important banks, and could have to face bankruptcy.
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Original:  The Nordic state – & whose economy is highly dependent on the banking system – is handling & great financial problems after the government was forced to nationalize the three most important banks, and could have to face bankruptcy.
Revised:  The Nordic state – & whose economy is highly dependent on the banking system – is handling & great financial problems after the government was forced to nationalize the three most important banks, and could face bankruptcy.
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Original:  Also, Germany's Chancellor Angela Merkel did not rule out nationalizing banks.
Revised:  Germany's Chancellor Angela Merkel did not rule out nationalizing banks.
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Original:  The incident happened at a Dallas hotel on tuesday night between Jones and his bodyguard.
Revised:  The incident happened at a Dallas hotel on Tuesday night between Jones and his bodyguard.
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Original:  Police were called to a disturbance call at the hotel where Jones and his bodyguard were in a bathroom and got into a arguement . Jones and his bodyguard said everything was just fine and they were both driven away by a friend.
Revised:  Police were called to a disturbance call at the hotel where Jones and his bodyguard were in a bathroom and got into a argument . Jones and his bodyguard said everything was just fine and they were both driven away by a friend.
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Original:  Jones had allready been in police trouble with a connection to a shooting in Las Vegas at a strip club.
Revised:  Jones had already been in police trouble with a connection to a shooting in Las Vegas at a strip club.
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Original:  NFL commisheneer Roger Goodell allowed Jones to come back to the NFL in August.
Revised:  NFL commissioner Roger Goodell allowed Jones to come back to the NFL in August.
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Original:  The owner of the Dallas Cowboys has not speaked yet to reporters.
Revised:  The owner of the Dallas Cowboys has not yet spoken to reporters.
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Original:  Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and it shouldnt distract their team.
Revised:  Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and it shouldn't distract their team.
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Original:  Jones was suspended in April 2007 by NFL Commisheneer Roger Goodell.
Revised:  Jones was suspended in April 2007 by NFL Commissioner Roger Goodell.
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