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Original: In a statement supporting the rally, URL Socialist Alliance linked the Cronulla riots to government policies and actions.
Revised: In a statement supporting the rally, Socialist Alliance linked the Cronulla riots to government policies and actions.
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Original: One Sydney blogger criticised the rallies because they focussed on racism against minority groups such as Lebanese, instead of racism in general.
Revised: One Sydney blogger criticised the rallies because they focused on racism against minority groups such as Lebanese, instead of racism in general.
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Original: Rubiales said,  Spain is scheduled to play their first group stage match against Portugal on Friday  .
Revised: Rubiales said, Spain is scheduled to play their first group stage match against Portugal on Friday in .
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Original:  This announcement comes just a day after Spanish capital-football club Real Madrid announced reaching an agreement with Lopetegui as club's new head coach after the World Cup ends.
Revised:  This announcement came just a day after Spanish capital-football club Real Madrid announced reaching an agreement with Lopetegui as club's new head coach after the World Cup ends.
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Original:  Yesterday, via their official website, Real Madrid had announced Lopetegui to coach the first team for the next three seasons.
Revised:  Yesterday, via their official website, Real Madrid announced Lopetegui to coach the first team for the next three seasons.
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Original:  Speaking at a press conference at , RFEF's head said, . Spain is scheduled to play their first group stage match against Portugal on Friday in . On May 22, RFEF had announced Lopetegui renewing his contract, extending it to 2020.
Revised:  Speaking at a press conference at , RFEF's head said, . Spain is scheduled to play their first group stage match against Portugal on Friday in . On May 22, RFEF announced Lopetegui renewing his contract, extending it to 2020.
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Original:  He had also coached Portuguese club .
Revised:  He has also coached Portuguese club .
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Original:  Per the contract with RFEF, to manage the national team, Lopetegui should not have a contract with any football club.
Revised:  To manage the national team, Lopetegui should not have a contract with any football club.
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Original: Accused of spying, the men were arrested when they apparently strayed along the unmarked Iran– border in July 2009, and were recently sentenced to eight years in prison each . Arrested with them was a third US hiker, Sarah Shourd, released in 2010 on medical grounds.
Revised: Accused of spying, the men were arrested when they apparently strayed along the unmarked Iran– border in July 2009, and were recently sentenced to eight years in prison . Arrested with them was a third US hiker, Sarah Shourd, released in 2010 on medical grounds.
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Original: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violation in the last two years in India's Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistan-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and . (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by UN's Office of High Commissioner , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
Revised: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violations in the last two years in India's Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistan-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and . (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by UN's Office of High Commissioner , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
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Original: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violation in the last two years in India's Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistan-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and . (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by UN's Office of High Commissioner , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
Revised: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violation in the last two years in India's Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistani-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and . (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by UN's Office of High Commissioner , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
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Original: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violation in the last two years in India's Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistan-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and . (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by UN's Office of High Commissioner , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
Revised: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violation in the last two years in India's Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistan-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and . (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by the UN Office of the , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
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Original:  , UN's said he would urge  Human Rights Council "to consider establishing a Commission of Inquiry to conduct a comprehensive independent international investigation into allegations of Human Rights violation in Kashmir".
Revised:  , UN's said he would urge the Human Rights Council "to consider establishing a Commission of Inquiry to conduct a comprehensive independent international investigation into allegations of Human Rights violation in Kashmir".
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Original:  , UN's said he would urge  Human Rights Council "to consider establishing a Commission of Inquiry to conduct a comprehensive independent international investigation into allegations of Human Rights violation in Kashmir".
Revised:  , UN's said he would urge Human Rights Council "to consider establishing a Commission of Inquiry to conduct a comprehensive independent international investigation into allegations of human rights violation in Kashmir".
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Original:  The report mentions human rights violation including torture, enforced disappearances, sexual violations, administrative detention, violations on the right to health and education, lack of access to justice and arbitrary arrests and detention among others.
Revised:  The report mentions human rights violations including torture, enforced disappearances, sexual violations, administrative detention, violations on the right to health and education, lack of access to justice and arbitrary arrests and detention among others.
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Original:  In July 2016, Indian Security Agencies killed 's leader  which led to protests in the Kashmir Vally .
Revised:  In July 2016, Indian security agencies killed 's leader which led to protests in the Kashmir Vally .
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Original:  In July 2016, Indian Security Agencies killed 's leader  which led to protests in the Kashmir Vally .
Revised:  In July 2016, Indian Security Agencies killed 's leader , which led to protests in the Kashmir Vally .
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Original:  In July 2016, Indian Security Agencies killed 's leader  which led to protests in the Kashmir Vally .
Revised:  In July 2016, Indian Security Agencies killed 's leader which led to protests in the Kashmir Valley .
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Original:  In response to the protests, Indian Security Agencies fired metallic bullets, and their activities led to human rights violation  the UN's report read.
Revised:  In response to the protests, Indian security agencies fired metallic bullets, and their activities led to human rights violation the UN's report read.
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Original:  In response to the protests, Indian Security Agencies fired metallic bullets, and their activities led to human rights violation  the UN's report read.
Revised:  In response to the protests, Indian Security Agencies fired metallic bullets, and their activities led to human rights violation , the UN's report read.
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Original:  The report asked India to "fully respect the right of self-determination of the people of Kashmir as protected under international law."  MEA issued a statement which read: "India rejects the report.
Revised:  The report asked India to "fully respect the right of self-determination of the people of Kashmir as protected under international law." The MEA issued a statement which read: "India rejects the report.
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Original:   MEA added in their statement, "Cross-border terror and incitement are aimed at suppressing the will of the people of Jammu & Kashmir, disrupting its political and social fabric and undermining India's integrity".
Revised:  The MEA added in their statement, "Cross-border terror and incitement are aimed at suppressing the will of the people of Jammu & Kashmir, disrupting its political and social fabric and undermining India's integrity".
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Original:  Khurram Parvez, a Human Rights activist from Jammu and Kashmir welcomed the UN 's report.
Revised:  Khurram Parvez, a human rights activist from Jammu and Kashmir welcomed the UN 's report.
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Original:  Khurram Parvez, a Human Rights activist from Jammu and Kashmir welcomed the UN 's report.
Revised:  Khurram Parvez, a Human Rights activist from Jammu and Kashmir welcomed the UN report.
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Original:  "People of Kashmir thank the U.N., especially the bold efforts of its HR commissioner, Zeid Ra'ad Al Hussein, for its support to the riXPght of self-determination.", Kashmiri leader wrote on Twitter.
Revised:  "People of Kashmir thank the U.N., especially the bold efforts of its HR commissioner, Zeid Ra'ad Al Hussein, for its support to the right of self-determination.", Kashmiri leader wrote on Twitter.
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Original:  In 2017, there were over 800 ceasefire violations along the heavily militarised Line of Control in Kashmir between India and Pakistan leading to deaths of civilians and security forces on both sides.
Revised:  In 2017, there were over 800 ceasefire violations along the heavily militarised Line of Control in Kashmir between India and Pakistan , leading to the deaths of civilians and security forces on both sides.
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Original:   The report mentions human rights violations including torture, enforced disappearances, sexual violations, administrative detention, violations on the right to health and education, lack of access to justice and arbitrary arrests and detention among others.
Revised:  <!- -This doesn’t read well because it is a repetition of the phrase "the report". The following sentence should be moved further up e.g. after the first sentence of the first paragraph.--> The report mentions human rights violations including torture, enforced disappearances, sexual violations, administrative detention, violations on the right to health and education, lack of access to justice and arbitrary arrests and detention among others.
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Original:  It also accused India of  unlawful killing of about 145 civilians since 2016.
Revised:  It also accused India of the unlawful killing of about 145 civilians since 2016.
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Original:  The report asked India to "fully respect the right of self-determination of the people of Kashmir as protected under international law." Pakistan's Foreign Officer welcomed the report.
Revised:  The report asked India to "fully respect the right of self-determination of the people of Kashmir as protected under international law." The Pakistani Foreign Office welcomed the report.
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Original:  In a press release, the Foreign Officer said Pakistan "welcomes the proposal by the UN High Commissioner for Human Rights to establish a Commission of Inquiry for international investigation into human rights violations" in Indian-held Kashmir.
Revised:  In a press release, the Foreign Office said Pakistan "welcomes the proposal by the UN High Commissioner for Human Rights to establish a Commission of Inquiry for international investigation into human rights violations" in Indian-held Kashmir.
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Original: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violations in the last two years in India's Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistani-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and .  (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by the UN Office of the , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
Revised: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violations in the last two years in the Indian state of Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistani-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and . (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by the UN Office of the , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
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Original: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violations in the last two years in India's Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistani-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and .  (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by the UN Office of the , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
Revised: On Thursday, the United Nations (UN) released its first-ever report for Kashmir, highlighting several incidents of alleged human rights violations in the last two years in India's Jammu and Kashmir as well as Pakistani-administered areas of Kashmir, namely and . The (MEA) denounced the 49-page report by the UN Office of the , calling it "selective", "malicious" and "fallacious".
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Original:  , the UN High Commissioner for Human Rights, said he would urge the  Human Rights Council "to consider establishing a Commission of Inquiry to conduct a comprehensive independent international investigation into allegations of human rights violation in Kashmir".
Revised:  , the UN High Commissioner for Human Rights, said he would urge the UN Human Rights Council "to consider establishing a Commission of Inquiry to conduct a comprehensive independent international investigation into allegations of human rights violation in Kashmir".
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Original:  Per the report, Pakistan was asked to stop "misuse of anti-terror legislation to persecute those engaging in peaceful political and civil activities and those who express dissent ".
Revised:  Per the report, Pakistan was asked to stop "misuse of anti-terror legislation to persecute those engaging in peaceful political and civil activities and those who express dissent ."
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Original:  In July 2016, Indian security agencies killed 's leader , which led to protests in the Kashmir Valley.
Revised:  In July 2016, Indian security forces killed the leader , which led to protests in the Kashmir Valley.
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Original:  In response to the protests, Indian security agencies fired metallic bullets, and their activities led to human rights violation, the UN 's report read.
Revised:  In response to the protests, Indian security forces fired metallic bullets, and their activities led to human rights violation, the UN 's report read.
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Original:  In response to the protests, Indian security agencies fired metallic bullets, and their activities led to human rights violation, the UN 's report read.
Revised:  In response to the protests, Indian security agencies fired metallic bullets, and their activities led to human rights violation, the UN report read.
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Original:  Kashmir is split between two countries and there have been two wars between the countries for Kashmir since their independence in 1947.
Revised:  Kashmir is split between two countries and there have been two wars between them for Kashmir since their independence in 1947.
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Original:  It is overtly prejudiced and seeks to build a false narrative ". Kashmir is split between two countries and there have been two wars between them for Kashmir since their independence in 1947.
Revised:  It is overtly prejudiced and seeks to build a false narrative ." Kashmir is split between two countries and there have been two wars between them for Kashmir since their independence in 1947.
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Original:  In 2017, there were over 800 ceasefire violations along the heavily militarised Line of Control in Kashmir between India and Pakistan, leading to the deaths of civilians and security forces on both sides.
Revised:  In 2017, there were over 800 ceasefire violations along the heavily-militarised Line of Control in Kashmir between India and Pakistan, leading to the deaths of civilians and security forces on both sides.
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Original:  The report mentions human rights violations including torture, enforced disappearances, sexual violations, administrative detention, violations on the right to health and education, lack of access to justice and arbitrary arrests and detention among others.
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Original:  In a press release, the Foreign Office said Pakistan "welcomes the proposal by the UN High Commissioner for Human Rights to establish a Commission of Inquiry for  international investigation into human rights violations" in Indian-held Kashmir.
Revised:  In a press release, the Foreign Office said Pakistan "welcomes the proposal by the UN High Commissioner for Human Rights to establish a Commission of Inquiry for an international investigation into human rights violations" in Indian-held Kashmir.
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Original:  Khurram Parvez, a human rights activist from Jammu and Kashmir  welcomed the UN report.
Revised:  The report was welcomed by some activists and leaders in Kashmir. Jammu and Kashmir welcomed the UN report.
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Original:   "People of Kashmir thank the U.N., especially the bold efforts of its HR commissioner, Zeid Ra'ad Al Hussein, for its support to the right of self-determination." , Kashmiri leader wrote on Twitter.
Revised:  Kashmiri leader wrote on Twitter, "People of Kashmir thank the U.N., especially the bold efforts of its HR commissioner, Zeid Ra'ad Al Hussein, for its support to the right of self-determination." , Kashmiri leader wrote on Twitter.
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Original:   "People of Kashmir thank the U.N., especially the bold efforts of its HR commissioner, Zeid Ra'ad Al Hussein, for its support to the right of self-determination." , Kashmiri leader wrote on Twitter.
Revised:  "People of Kashmir thank the U.N., especially the bold efforts of its HR commissioner, Zeid Ra'ad Al Hussein, for its support to the right of self-determination." 
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Original:  There are no entities such as 'Azad Jammu and Kashmir' and 'Gilgit-Baltistan'", Indian 's External Affairs ministry said in their statement.
Revised:  There are no entities such as 'Azad Jammu and Kashmir' and 'Gilgit-Baltistan'", India 's External Affairs ministry said in their statement.
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Original:  Jammu and Kashmir 's human rights activist Khurram Parvez welcomed the UN report.
Revised:  Jammu and Kashmir human rights activist Khurram Parvez welcomed the UN report.
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Original:  The Kashmir-conflict between India and Pakistan has led to at least two wars since their independence in 1947.
Revised:  The Kashmir-conflict between India and Pakistan has led to two wars since their independence in 1947.
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Original:  Per the constitution of Jammu and Kashmir it "is and shall be an integral part of the Union of India" while Pakistan's constitution does not mention Azad Kashmir or Gilgit-Baltistan in its territories, but has a provision for relations with Pakistan subject to Jammu and Kashmir people's decision to acceede to Pakistan.
Revised:  Per the constitution of Jammu and Kashmir it "is and shall be an integral part of the Union of India" while does not mention Azad Kashmir or Gilgit-Baltistan in its territories, but has a provision for relations with Pakistan subject to Jammu and Kashmir people's decision to acceede to Pakistan.
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Original:  In the 12th minute, Russia got the breakthrough, when Yuri Gazinskiy scored a header from the third corner kick of the game, assisted by . Russia made their first substitution in the 24th minute.
Revised:  In the 12th minute, Russia got the breakthrough, when Yuri Gazinskiy scored a header assisted by . Russia made their first substitution in the 24th minute.
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Original:  Golovin, who had already provided two assists in the game  took the free kick and scored in the bottom right corner.
Revised:  Golovin, who had already provided two assists in the game , took the free kick and scored in the bottom right corner.
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Original:  Saudi conceded six corners in the entire match and committed ten fouls in total.
Revised:  The Saudis conceded six corners in the entire match and committed ten fouls in total.
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Original:  I already felt very happy just to be  the squad.
Revised:  I already felt very happy just to be on the squad.
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Original: Tournament then will have 80 games, 16 more since previous editions, but it will still last 32 days.
Revised: The tournament then will have 80 games, 16 more since previous editions, but it will still last 32 days.
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Original:  Instead of current 8 groups of 4 teams scheme,  tournament will have 16 groups of 3 teams each one, of which the first two will go to the round of 32.
Revised:  Instead of current 8 groups of 4 teams scheme, the tournament will have 16 groups of 3 teams each one, of which the first two will go to the round of 32.
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Original:  The next FIFA Congress will be held in June 5th , 2019, in Paris , two days before the first game of the 2019 FIFA Women's World Cup in France
Revised:  The next FIFA Congress is scheduled to be held on June 5 , 2019, in Paris , two days before the first game of the 2019 FIFA Women's World Cup in France
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Original:  The next FIFA Congress will be held in June 5th , 2019, in Paris , two days before the first game of the 2019 FIFA Women's World Cup in France
Revised:  The next FIFA Congress will be held in June 5th , 2019, in Paris ; two days before the first game of the 2019 FIFA Women's World Cup in France
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Original:  The next FIFA Congress will be held in June 5th , 2019, in Paris , two days before the first game of the 2019 FIFA Women's World Cup in France
Revised:  The next FIFA Congress will be held in June 5th , 2019, in Paris , two days before the first game of the in France
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Original: The tournament then will have 80 games, 16 more since previous editions, but it will still last 32 days.
Revised: The tournament then will have 80 games, sixteen more than the previous editions, but it will still last 32 days.
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Original: The tournament then will have 80 games, 16 more since previous editions, but it will still last 32 days.
Revised: The tournament then will have 80 games, 16 more since previous editions, but the tournament is scheduled to last 32 days.
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Original:  Instead of current 8 groups of 4 teams scheme, the tournament will have 16 groups of 3 teams each one, of which the first two will go to the round of 32.
Revised:  Instead of current format involving eight groups consisting of four teams each, the 2026 World Cup is to have sixteen groups of three teams each one, of which the first two will go to the round of 32.
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