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Original: Larry Sanger announced Citizendium.org , a fork of the English Wikipedia , at the Wizards of OS conference in Berlin today.
Revised: Larry Sanger announced Citizendium.org , a fork of the English Wikipedia , at the conference in Berlin today.
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Original:  Sanger was employed by Jimmy Wales to work on Nupedia and later Wikipedia from 2000-2002.
Revised:  Sanger was employed by Jimmy Wales to work on and later Wikipedia from 2000-2002.
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Original:  He currently works on the Digital Universe initiative with entrepreneur Joe Firmage and astrophysicist Bernard Haisch , but does not anticipate Citizendium being part of Digital Universe.
Revised:  He currently works on the initiative with entrepreneur Joe Firmage and astrophysicist Bernard Haisch , but does not anticipate Citizendium being part of Digital Universe.
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Original:  He currently works on the Digital Universe initiative with entrepreneur Joe Firmage and astrophysicist Bernard Haisch , but does not anticipate Citizendium being part of Digital Universe.
Revised:  He currently works on the Digital Universe initiative with entrepreneur and astrophysicist , but does not anticipate Citizendium being part of Digital Universe.
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Original:  Citizendium will be free content, licensed under the GNU Free Documentation License as Wikipedia is, but with a different editorial structure.
Revised:  Citizendium will be free content, licensed under the as Wikipedia is, but with a different editorial structure.
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Original:  The only fork that is actively edited is Wikinfo.org , run by Fred Bauder, an administrator and arbitrator on the English Wikipedia.
Revised:  The only fork that is actively edited is , run by Fred Bauder, an administrator and arbitrator on the English Wikipedia.
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Original:  Dell's share price has been in a sharp decline as the company has struggled to deal with declining PC and server revenues.
Revised: __NOTOC__ Dell's share price has been in a sharp decline as the company has struggled to deal with declining PC and server revenues.
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Original: IT commentators state that Microsoft's firewall changes are necessary and strong firewalls have been standard for many years in other operating systems, such as Mac OS X Linux.
Revised:  Linux.
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Original:  The EC had expressed mild concern that the  changes might lock out third party security companies & decrease security by creating a more homogeneous computing enviroment.
Revised:  The EC had expressed concern that the changes might lock out third party security companies & decrease security by creating a more homogeneous computing enviroment.
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Original: Microsoft has also claimed that the EC may require that some security features be removed from Vista, possibly refering to internal firewall changes in Vista.
Revised: Microsoft has also claimed that the EC may require that some security features be removed from Vista, possibly referring to internal firewall changes in Vista.
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Original:  The EC had expressed concern that the firewall changes might lock out third party security companies & decrease security by creating a more homogeneous computing enviroment .
Revised:  The EC had expressed concern that the firewall changes might lock out third party security companies & decrease security by creating a more homogeneous computing environment .
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Original:  The EC denies any responsibility for a potential shipment delay of Vista, stating that the onus is upon Microsoft to comply with the competition laws of Europe and not for the EC to tell Microsoft how to design Vista . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Discussions related to this wikinews story can be found at: Slashdot Category:Economy and business Category:Computing Category:Developing Category:Microsoft Category:European Union Category:Europe Category:Crime and l
Revised:  The EC denies any responsibility for a potential shipment delay of Vista, stating that the onus is upon Microsoft to comply with the competition laws of Europe and not for the EC to tell Microsoft how to design Vista Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Discussions related to this wikinews story can be found at: Slashdot Category:Economy and business Category:Computing Category:Developing Category:Microsoft Category:European Union Category:Europe Category:Crime and l
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Original:  The EC denies any responsibility for a potential shipment delay of Vista, stating that the onus is upon Microsoft to comply with the competition laws of Europe and not for the EC to tell Microsoft how to design Vista . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Discussions related to this wikinews story can be found at: Slashdot Category:Economy and business Category:Computing Category:Developing Category:Microsoft Category:European Union Category:Europe Category:Crime and l
Revised:  The EC denies any responsibility for a potential shipment delay of Vista, stating that the onus is upon Microsoft to comply with the competition laws of Europe and not for the EC to tell Microsoft how to design Vista . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Discussions related to this wikinews story can be found at: Slashdot Category:Economy and business Category:Computing Category:Developing Category:Microsoft Category:European Union Category:Europe Category:Crime and l
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Original:  The EC denies any responsibility for a potential shipment delay of Vista, stating that the onus is upon Microsoft to comply with the competition laws of Europe and not for the EC to tell Microsoft how to design Vista . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Discussions related to this wikinews story can be found at: Slashdot Category:Economy and business Category:Computing Category:Developing Category:Microsoft Category:European Union Category:Europe Category:Crime and l
Revised:  The EC denies any responsibility for a potential shipment delay of Vista, stating that the onus is upon Microsoft to comply with the competition laws of Europe and not for the EC to tell Microsoft how to design Vista . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Economy and business Category:Computing Category:Developing Category:Microsoft Category:European Union Category:Europe Category:Crime and l
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Original:  Police report at least 20 people being injured, some of which are still in critical condition.
Revised:  Police report at least 20 people being injured, some of whom are still in critical condition.
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Original:  BT said it still harbours ambitions to conquer America, despite the failure of the 'Concert' partnership with AT T in the 1990s.
Revised:  BT said it still harbours ambitions to conquer America, despite the failure of the 'Concert' partnership with T in the 1990s.
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Original:  BT said it still harbours ambitions to conquer America, despite the failure of the '  Concert ' partnership with MCI in the 1990s.
Revised:  BT said it still harbours ambitions to conquer America, despite the failure of the ' Concert ' partnership with V in the 1990s.
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Original:  BT said it still harbours ambitions to conquer America, despite the failure of the ' w:ConcertCommunications Services| Concert ' partnership with V in the 1990s.
Revised:  BT said it still harbours ambitions to conquer America, despite the failure of the ' Concert ' partnership with V in the 1990s.
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Original: The popularity of Websites that rely on user-generated content has increased dramatically in the UK , according to new statistics : MySpace is up 467\% to 5.2 million visitors , Piczo is up 393\% to 4 million , YouTube now has 3.9 million, and Bebo is up 328\% to 3.9 million .
Revised: The popularity of Websites that rely on user-generated content has increased dramatically in the United Kingdom , according to new statistics : MySpace is up 467\% to 5.2 million visitors , Piczo is up 393\% to 4 million , YouTube now has 3.9 million, and Bebo is up 328\% to 3.9 million .
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Original: The popularity of Websites that rely on user-generated content has increased dramatically in the UK , according to new statistics : MySpace is up 467\% to 5.2 million visitors , Piczo is up 393\% to 4 million , YouTube now has 3.9 million, and Bebo is up 328\% to 3.9 million .
Revised: The popularity of Websites that rely on user-generated content has increased dramatically in the UK , according to new statistics : MySpace is up 467\% to 5.2 million visitors , Piczo is up 393\% to 4 million . Bebo is up 328\% to 3.9 million .
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Original:  Even Wikipedia saw a 181\% increase in usage, year-on-year .
Revised:  Even Wikipedia saw a 181\% increase .
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Original:  These sites draw more frequent visits that other non-user-generated sites in the UK Top 50 : 4.2 usage-days per month (compared to the 3.5 average) , longer periods of engagement (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average), and more pages viewed (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average).
Revised:  These sites draw more frequent visits that other non-user-generated sites in the UK Top 50 , with 4.2 usage-days per month (compared to the 3.5 average) , longer periods of engagement (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average), and more pages viewed (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average).
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  These sites draw more frequent visits that other non-user-generated sites in the UK Top 50 : 4.2 usage-days per month (compared to the 3.5 average) , longer periods of engagement (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average), and more pages viewed (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average).
Revised:  These sites draw more frequent visits that other non-user-generated sites in the UK Top 50 : 4.2 usage-days per month (compared to the 3.5 average) . They tend to engage visitors for longer (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average), and more pages viewed (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average).
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Original:  These sites draw more frequent visits that other non-user-generated sites in the UK Top 50 : 4.2 usage-days per month (compared to the 3.5 average) , longer periods of engagement (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average), and more pages viewed (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average).
Revised:  These sites draw more frequent visits that other non-user-generated sites in the UK Top 50 : 4.2 usage-days per month (compared to the 3.5 average) , longer periods of engagement (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average), visitors tend to view more pages per visit (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average).
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Original:  Users generate a lot of noise in promoting themselves, but there's little evidence that many of them are listening to each other -- which severely restricts the site owners' ability to make real advertising revenues
Revised:  Users generate a lot of noise in promoting themselves, but there's little evidence that many of them are listening to each other — which severely restricts the site owners' ability to make real advertising revenues
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Original:  They tend to engage visitors for longer (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average ), visitors tend to view more pages per visit (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average  ).
Revised:  They tend to engage visitors for longer (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average over all), and visitors tend to view more pages per visit (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average ).
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Original:  They tend to engage visitors for longer (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average ), visitors tend to view more pages per visit (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average  ).
Revised:  They tend to engage visitors for longer (80 minutes per visitor, compared to the 33-minute average ), visitors tend to view more pages per visit (217 pages per visitor, compared to 52-page average over all ).
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Original:  Because users of these sites visit more frequently, stay longer  and view more content, the argument goes that this creates more opportunities for marketers to communicate messages.
Revised:  Because users of these sites visit more frequently, stay longer , and view more content, the argument goes that this creates more opportunities for marketers to communicate messages.
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Original:  However, in reality, as the number of pages served becomes very large, it gets more difficult to find sufficient advertising inventory to send with those pages.
Revised:  However, in reality, as the number of pages served becomes very large, it becomes more difficult to find sufficient advertising inventory to send with those pages.
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Original:  Users generate a lot of noise in promoting themselves, but there's little evidence that many of them are listening to each other — which severely restricts the site owners' ability to make real advertising revenues
Revised:  Moreover, users generate a lot of noise in promoting themselves, but there's little evidence that many of them are listening to each other — which severely restricts the site owners' ability to make real advertising revenues
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Original: Virginia ’ s state crime commission recommended on Wednesday that more research was needed on a legislative bill that would allow convicted sex offenders to opt out of behavioral treatment centers if they agreed to voluntary castration.
Revised: Virginia ' s state crime commission recommended on Wednesday that more research was needed on a legislative bill that would allow convicted sex offenders to opt out of behavioral treatment centers if they agreed to voluntary castration.
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Original: Colombian authorities found on Thursday (14) night in Armenia a 2-month-old baby  who was kidnapped by a woman on Monday in Bogotá .
Revised: Colombian authorities rescued a 2-month-old baby who was kidnapped by a woman on Monday in Bogotá .
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Original: Colombian authorities found on Thursday (14) night in Armenia a 2-month-old baby  who was kidnapped by a woman on Monday in Bogotá .
Revised: Colombian authorities found on Thursday (14) night in Armenia a 2-month-old baby , who was kidnapped by a woman on Monday in Bogotá .
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Original:  The baby  , Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who , pretending to belong to a NGO, told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz y Henry López Romero , she could get some medical attention for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
Revised:  The baby girl , Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who , pretending to belong to a NGO, told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz y Henry López Romero , she could get some medical attention for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
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Original:  The baby  , Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who , pretending to belong to a NGO, told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz y Henry López Romero , she could get some medical attention for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
Revised:  The baby , Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz y Henry López Romero , she could get some medical attention for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The baby  , Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who , pretending to belong to a NGO, told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz y Henry López Romero , she could get some medical attention for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
Revised:  The baby , Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who , pretending to belong to a NGO, told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz and Henry López Romero , she could get some medical attention for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
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Original:  The baby  , Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who , pretending to belong to a NGO, told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz y Henry López Romero , she could get some medical attention for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
Revised:  The baby , Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who , pretending to belong to a NGO, told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz y Henry López Romero that she belonged to an NGO and could get medical care for for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
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Original:  The parents, who are displaced people, went to Caracol TV network in order to report the kidnap . Surveillance recordings from the hotel and the city's bus terminal helped with the search.
Revised:  The parents, who are displaced people, went to Caracol TV network in order to report the kidnapping . Surveillance recordings from the hotel and the city's bus terminal helped with the search.
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Original:  The woman,  in her late twenties, black hair, almond-shaped eyes and height 1.65 m , left the hotel with two men , went to the bus terminal and left it too .
Revised:  The woman, described as in her late twenties, black hair, almond-shaped eyes and height 1.65 m , left the hotel with two men , went to the bus terminal and left it too .
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Original:  The woman,  in her late twenties, black hair, almond-shaped eyes and height 1.65 m , left the hotel with two men , went to the bus terminal and left it too .
Revised:  The woman, in her late twenties, of height 1.65 m, and having black hair and almond-shaped eyes and height 1.65 m , left the hotel with two men , went to the bus terminal and left it too .
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Original:  The woman,  in her late twenties, black hair, almond-shaped eyes and height 1.65 m , left the hotel with two men , went to the bus terminal and left it too .
Revised:  The woman, in her late twenties, black hair, almond-shaped eyes , left the hotel with two men , went to the bus terminal and left it too .
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The woman,  in her late twenties, black hair, almond-shaped eyes and height 1.65 m , left the hotel with two men , went to the bus terminal and left it too .
Revised:  The woman, in her late twenties, black hair, almond-shaped eyes and height 1.65 m , left the hotel with two men and went to the bus terminal and left it too .
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The woman,  in her late twenties, black hair, almond-shaped eyes and height 1.65 m , left the hotel with two men , went to the bus terminal and left it too .
Revised:  The woman, in her late twenties, black hair, almond-shaped eyes and height 1.65 m , left the hotel with two men , went to the local bus terminal .
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Original:  On Thursday, a taxi driver told the media that the day before  he had driven a woman with those features to Cedritos, a neighbourhood  northeast Bogotá.
Revised:  On Thursday, a taxi driver told the media that the day before , he had driven a woman with those features to Cedritos, a neighbourhood northeast Bogotá.
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Original:  On Thursday, a taxi driver told the media that the day before  he had driven a woman with those features to Cedritos, a neighbourhood  northeast Bogotá.
Revised:  On Thursday, a taxi driver told the media that the day before he had driven a woman with those features to Cedritos, a neighbourhood in northeast Bogotá.
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Original:  She confessed  she had abandoned the baby in a hotel in Armenia, where Maribel was finally found and moved to a hospital.
Revised:  She confessed that she had abandoned the baby in a hotel in Armenia, where Maribel was finally found and moved to a hospital.
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Original:  The doctors told she was in good health.
Revised:  The doctors found the baby to be in good health.
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Original:  The child was returned to her parents at 11:30  (16:30 UTC on Friday
Revised:  The child was returned to her parents at 11:30 a.m. (16:30 UTC on Friday
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Original:  The child was returned to her parents at 11:30 a.m. (16:30 UTC  on Friday
Revised:  The child was returned to her parents at 11:30 a.m. (16:30 UTC ) on Friday
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Original: The baby girl, Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz and Henry López Romero that she belonged to an NGO and could get medical care for for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
Revised: The baby girl, Maribel Muñoz, was taken by a woman who told her parents, Zenaida Muñoz and Henry López Romero that she belonged to an NGO and could get medical care for the girl inside Hotel Tequendama.
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Original: Mentioning his 2004 movie  Sex Lives of the Potatoe Men had bad reviews, he replied "Well I listened to your album and it was sh*t."
Revised: Mentioning his 2004 movie w: Sex Lives of the Potatoe Men had bad reviews, he replied "Well I listened to your album and it was sh*t."
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Original: Mentioning his 2004 movie  Sex Lives of the Potatoe Men had bad reviews, he replied "Well I listened to your album and it was sh*t."
Revised: Mentioning his 2004 movie Sex Lives of the Potato Men had bad reviews, he replied "Well I listened to your album and it was sh*t."
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Original:  Opera singer-turned-talk show host Charlotte Church desired to book hotel heiress Paris Hilton on her program, to insult her.
Revised:  Opera singer-turned-talk show host Charlotte Church wanted to book hotel heiress Paris Hilton on her program, to insult her.
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Original:  Church says Hilton is too expensive though, charging USD$650,000 for an appearance, and her producers dropped the concept .
Revised:  Church says Hilton is too expensive though, charging USD$650,000 for an appearance, and her producers dropped the idea .
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Original:  She slapped him, and shouted "Shut the f*** up", after he made numerous rude comments and stared down female audience members.
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Original:  When Church commented that the she and he sang karaoke together in a hotel owned by her mother, Vegas replied "Yes and I sh*gged your grandma too."
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Original:  She slapped him, and shouted "Shut the f*** up", after he made numerous rude comments and stared down female audience members.
Revised:  She slapped him, and shouted "Shut the fuck up", after he made numerous rude comments and stared down female audience members.
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Original:  When Church commented that the she and he sang karaoke together in a hotel owned by her mother, Vegas replied "Yes and I sh*gged your grandma too."
Revised:  When Church commented that the she and he sang karaoke together in a hotel owned by her mother, Vegas replied "Yes and I shagged your grandma too."
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Original:  Mentioning his 2004 movie Sex Lives of the Potato Men had bad reviews, he replied "Well I listened to your album and it was sh*t ." Her album, "Tissues and Issues", reached #5 on the UK music charts.
Revised:  Mentioning his 2004 movie Sex Lives of the Potato Men had bad reviews, he replied "Well I listened to your album and it was shit ." Her album, "Tissues and Issues", reached #5 on the UK music charts.
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Original: While Church was hoping to dish insults and ridicule, she has proven she isn't willing to take them.
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Original:  When Church commented that the she and he sang karaoke together in a hotel owned by her mother, Vegas replied "Yes and I shagged your grandma too."
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Original:  In it's third year, the Viacom-owned channel attempts to stop childhood obesity through encouraging activity.
Revised:  In its third year, the Viacom-owned channel attempts to stop childhood obesity through encouraging activity.
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Original:  The popular children's channel will be airing a black screen, starting at 11 am, but it won't have gone bankrupt .
Revised:  The popular children's channel will be airing a black screen, starting at 11 a.m .
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