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Original:  Then back home for a month and then got to go to Europe, where we played in Frankfurt for the four games, and to Papandaal with the Netherlands team.
Revised:  Then back home for a month and then got to go to Europe, where we played in Frankfurt for the four games, and to with the Netherlands team.
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Original:  We played three games there beforee we came here.
Revised:  We played three games there before we came here.
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Original:  Tom Kyle: I was born in , in the in . Way back in 1959. 15th of June.
Revised:  Tom Kyle: I was born in , in the in . Way back in 1959. Fifteenth of June.
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Original:  As a 14 year old I represented them in the under-18s, and then as a 16 year old I represented them in the senor men's competition.
Revised:  As a 14-year-old I represented them in the under-18s, and then as a 16 year old I represented them in the senor men's competition.
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Original:  As a 14 year old I represented them in the under-18s, and then as a 16 year old I represented them in the senor men's competition.
Revised:  As a 14 year old I represented them in the under-18s, and then as a 16-year-old I represented them in the senor men's competition.
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Original:  At the age of 16 was when I first started coaching.
Revised:  At the age of 16 is when I first started coaching.
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Original:  Went on to... well, potentially I could have gone further but it is a sport where you spend all weekend, four afternoons a week...
Revised:  Went on to... potentially I could have gone further but it is a sport where you spend all weekend, four afternoons a week...
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Original:  Went on to... well, potentially I could have gone further but it is a sport where you spend all weekend, four afternoons a week...
Revised:  Went on to... well, potentially I could have gone further but cricket became one of those sports where you spend all weekend, four afternoons a week...
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Original:  Tom Kyle: At that stage I was still an A grade cricketer playing in Cooma and  in Canberra, played and , had a go at AFL [], . Because in country towns you play everything. on a Saturday.
Revised:  Tom Kyle: At that stage I was still an A grade cricketer in Cooma and in Canberra, played and , had a go at AFL [], . Because in country towns you play everything. on a Saturday.
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Original:  Tom Kyle: At that stage I was still an A grade cricketer playing in Cooma and  in Canberra, played and , had a go at AFL [], . Because in country towns you play everything. on a Saturday.
Revised:  Tom Kyle: At that stage I was still an A grade cricketer playing in Cooma and in Canberra, and and , had a go at AFL [], . Because in country towns you play everything. on a Saturday.
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Original:  I repeated Year 12, which was really great because it gave me a lot more time for my sports , which I really loved.
Revised:  I repeated Year 12, which was great because it gave me a lot more time for my sports , which I really loved.
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Original:  I repeated Year 12, which was really great because it gave me a lot more time for my sports , which I really loved.
Revised:  I repeated Year 12, which was really great because it allowed me to play more of the sport , which I really loved.
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Original:  I repeated Year 12, which was really great because it gave me a lot more time for my sports , which I really loved.
Revised:  I repeated Year 12, which was really great because it gave me a lot more time for my sports , which I loved.
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Original:  Didn't really work that much harder but I got the marks that I needed to get my scholarship to .
Revised:  Didn't really work that much harder but I got the marks that I needed to get the scholarship to .
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Original:  So I got a degree from the University of Wollongong and  a degree from the Institute of Education.
Revised:  So I got a degree from the University of Wollongong and I got a degree from the Institute of Education.
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Original:  At that stage I was coaching and playing rep basketball in Wollongong in their team underneath the NBL I played state league there for . Still coaching there with the University, coaching the university sides.
Revised:  At that stage I was coaching and playing rep basketball in Wollongong in their team underneath the NBL I played state league there for . Still coaching as well with the University, coaching the university sides.
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Original:  So in '84 I got married and I moved to , and started teaching and looking after the sports of basketball and tennis at in Brisbane.
Revised:  So in '84 I got married and I moved to , and started teaching and looking after the sport of basketball and tennis at in Brisbane.
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Original:  The job basically entailed looking after their gymnasium and  some part-time teaching as well as being the basketball convener and tennis convener.
Revised:  The job basically entailed looking after their gymnasium and doing some part-time teaching as well as being the basketball convener and tennis convener.
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Original:  Churchie is a very big school in Brisbane and I lived there with my wife  on the premises in Brisbane.
Revised:  Churchie is a very big school in Brisbane and I lived there with my wife at that stage and we lived on the premises in Brisbane.
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Original:  In '85 I took a team of 15 boys from Churchie into the for a couple of Summer Camp tours which we did , and I got involved in the team at that stage, getting them moved in to Churchie to train.
Revised:  In '85 I took a team of fifteen boys from Churchie into the for a couple of Summer Camp tours which we did , and I got involved in the team at that stage, getting them moved in to Churchie to train.
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Original:  In '85 I took a team of 15 boys from Churchie into the for a couple of Summer Camp tours which we did , and I got involved in the team at that stage, getting them moved in to Churchie to train.
Revised:  In '85 I took a team of 15 boys from Churchie into the for a couple of summer camp tours which we did , and I got involved in the team at that stage, getting them moved in to Churchie to train.
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Original:  In '85 I took a team of 15 boys from Churchie into the for a couple of Summer Camp tours which we did , and I got involved in the team at that stage, getting them moved in to Churchie to train.
Revised:  In '85 I took a team of 15 boys from Churchie into the for a couple of Summer Camp tours which we do , and I got involved in the team at that stage, getting them moved in to Churchie to train.
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Original:  The Brisbane Bullets being the team in Brisbane at the time.
Revised:  The Brisbane Bullets was the team in Brisbane at the time.
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Original:  So that got me involved in the Brisbane coaching of junior basketball.
Revised:  So that got me involved in the Brisbane coaching and junior basketball.
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Original:  Looked after some things at the  Bullets' home games.
Revised:  Looked after some things at the Brisbane Bullets' home games.
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Original:  With that came a  change of priorities .
Revised:  With that came a bit of change of priorities .
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Original:  I suppose the teaching side of things at that stage didn't appeal to me, the coaching side did, but the teaching side , the fact that you had to follow the curriculums, and some of the things you weren't allowed to have fun, and to me if you're going to learn you've got to have fun.
Revised:  I suppose the teaching side of things at that stage didn't appeal to me, the coaching side did, the teaching side , the fact that you had to follow the curriculums, and some of the things you weren't allowed to have fun, and to me if you're going to learn you've got to have fun.
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Original:  I suppose the teaching side of things at that stage didn't appeal to me, the coaching side did, but the teaching side , the fact that you had to follow the curriculums, and some of the things you weren't allowed to have fun, and to me if you're going to learn you've got to have fun.
Revised:  I suppose the teaching side of things at that stage didn't appeal to me, the coaching side did, but the teaching side and the fact that you had to follow the curriculums, and some of the things you weren't allowed to have fun, and to me if you're going to learn you've got to have fun.
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Original:  I suppose the teaching side of things at that stage didn't appeal to me, the coaching side did, but the teaching side , the fact that you had to follow the curriculums, and some of the things you weren't allowed to have fun, and to me if you're going to learn you've got to have fun.
Revised:  I suppose the teaching side of things at that stage didn't appeal to me, the coaching side did, but the teaching side , the fact that you had to follow the curriculums, and some of the things you weren't allowed to have fun, to me if you're going to learn you've got to have fun.
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Original:  So that was my sort of enough for the teaching side  I figured I'd go and do something else, and get to keep my coaching alive on the side.
Revised:  So that was my sort of enough for the teaching side , I figured I'd go and do something else, and get to keep my coaching alive on the side.
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Original:  I had a second son in 1987, and I started coaching the Manly-Warringah senior men's and development league teams.
Revised:  I had a second son in 1987, and I started coaching the senior men's and development league teams.
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Original:  So I had both of those teams .
Revised:  So I had both of those teams and
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Original:  We were fortunate enough that we came second the year I was the head coach of the men in the state competition for our area.
Revised:  We were fortunate enough we came second the year I was the head coach of the men in the state competition for our area.
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Original:  That gave me a whole  perspective of coaching, because it was now senior men's coaching as well as junior men's.
Revised:  That gave me a whole new perspective of coaching, because it was now senior men's coaching as well as junior men's.
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Original:  We had people like coming out of the NBL in Sydney and trying out wanting to play with the men's squad in that group .
Revised:  We had people like coming out of the NBL at Sydney and trying out wanting to play with the men's squad in that group .
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Original:  We had people like coming out of the NBL in Sydney and trying out wanting to play with the men's squad in that group .
Revised:  We had people like coming out of the NBL in Sydney and trying out wanting to play with the men's squad .
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Original:  I didn't coach them, but and  played for the .
Revised:  I didn't coach them, but and who played for the .
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Original:  It was at the time the state swimming centre.
Revised:  Which was at the time the state swimming centre.
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Original:  Or 18, 19 months.
Revised:  Or eighteen, nineteen months.
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Original:  In that time we held the selection criteria for the in swimming.
Revised:  In that time we held the selection criteria for the swimming.
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Original:  So I was there for two years, 18 months basically.
Revised:  So I was there for two years, eighteen months basically.
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Original:  So moved back to Brisbane in 1989, to take up a job as a marketing officer at the Department of Recreation at . So that was my full-time job.
Revised:  So moved back to Brisbane in 1989, to take up a job as a marketing officer at the Department of Recreation at . That was my full-time job.
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Original:  Meanwhile, again, I got involved in a little bit of coaching.
Revised:  Meanwhile, again, I got involved in a bit of coaching.
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Original:  My sons were looking at becoming involved .. they were going through St Peter Chanel School at , and that was a feeder school for Marist Brothers Ashgrove in Brisbane, and that was a big Catholic boys' school  .
Revised:  My sons were looking at becoming involved , they were going through St Peter Chanel School at , and that was a feeder school for Marist Brothers Ashgrove in Brisbane, and that was a big Catholic boys' school .
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Original:  My sons were looking at becoming involved .. they were going through St Peter Chanel School at , and that was a feeder school for Marist Brothers Ashgrove in Brisbane, and that was a big Catholic boys' school  .
Revised:  My sons were looking at becoming involved .. they were going through St Peter Chanel School at , and that was a feeder school for Marist Brothers Ashgrove in Brisbane, which was a big Catholic boys' school .
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Original:  My sons were looking at becoming involved .. they were going through St Peter Chanel School at , and that was a feeder school for Marist Brothers Ashgrove in Brisbane, and that was a big Catholic boys' school  .
Revised:  My sons were looking at becoming involved .. they were going through St Peter Chanel School at , and that was a feeder school for Marist Brothers Ashgrove in Brisbane, and that was a big Catholic boys' school in Brisbane .
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Original:  So I started getting involved in Marist Brothers Ashgrove basketball program, and I became the convener of basketball as well as the head coach there for  seven or eight years running their program  while my boys  were going through the school.
Revised:  So I started to get involved in Marist Brothers Ashgrove basketball program, and I became the convener of basketball as well as the head coach there for seven or eight years running their program while my boys were going through the school.
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Original:  So I started getting involved in Marist Brothers Ashgrove basketball program, and I became the convener of basketball as well as the head coach there for  seven or eight years running their program  while my boys  were going through the school.
Revised:  So I started getting involved in Marist Brothers Ashgrove basketball program, and I became the convener of basketball as well as the head coach there for about seven or eight years running their program while my boys were going through the school.
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Original:  So I started getting involved in Marist Brothers Ashgrove basketball program, and I became the convener of basketball as well as the head coach there for  seven or eight years running their program  while my boys  were going through the school.
Revised:  So I started getting involved in Marist Brothers Ashgrove basketball program, and I became the convener of basketball as well as the head coach there for seven or eight years running their program , while my boys were going through the school.
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Original:  That was a voluntary thing, because I was still working for the Brisbane City [ Council when I first started.
Revised:  That was a voluntary thing, because I was still working for the [ Council when I first started.
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Original:  That was a voluntary thing, because I was still working for the Brisbane City [ Council when I first started.
Revised:  That was a voluntary thing, because I was still working for the Brisbane City [Brisbane City Council when I first started.
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Original:  At that stage I  also quit the council job and started my own IT [ company.
Revised:  At that stage I 'd also quit the council job and started my own IT [ company.
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Original:  Which was quite interesting , because as a sideline I was writing software.
Revised:  Which was quite interesting . Because as a sideline I was writing software.
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Original:  They said, "  here's an old computer", it was an old actually, so it was not quite an XT.
Revised:  They said, " well, here's an old computer", it was an old actually, so it was not quite an XT.
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Original:  One of the guys at council said they'd got an old copy of .
Revised:  One of the guys at council said "we've got an old copy of .
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Original:  We might give you that,  which old an old database programming language .
Revised:  We might give you that, " which old an old database programming language .
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Original:  We might give you that,  which old an old database programming language .
Revised:  We might give you that, which old an old database programming tool .
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Original:  So I took that and I wrote a point of sales system for the centre.
Revised:  So I took that and I wrote a system for the centre.
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Original:  And then we upgraded from DateEase , we went to and . Didn't like dBase IV, it had all these bugs in it, so my system started to crash.
Revised:  And then we upgraded from DataEase , we went to and . Didn't like dBase IV, it had all these bugs in it, so my system started to crash.
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Original:  So I'd go home at night and write the program, and I'd put it into the centre during the day and collect the statistics I wanted.
Revised:  So I'd go home at night and write the program, and then come back and put it into the centre during the day and collect the statistics I wanted.
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Original:  So I'd go home at night and write the program, and I'd put it into the centre during the day and collect the statistics I wanted.
Revised:  So I'd go home at night and write the program, and I'd put it into the centre during the day so they could collect the statistics I wanted.
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Original:  It was a simple point of sales system, but it was effective and that sort of stuff so then we upgraded that to Clipper and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system . Bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sales .
Revised:  It was a simple point of sale system, but it was effective and that sort of stuff so then we upgraded that to Clipper and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system . Bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sales .
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Original:  It was a simple point of sales system, but it was effective and that sort of stuff so then we upgraded that to Clipper and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system . Bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sales .
Revised:  It was a simple point of sales system, but it was effective , and then we upgraded that to Clipper and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system . Bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sales .
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Original:  It was a simple point of sales system, but it was effective and that sort of stuff so then we upgraded that to Clipper and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system . Bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sales .
Revised:  It was a simple point of sales system, but it was effective and that sort of stuff so then we upgraded that to and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system . Bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sales .
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Original:  It was a simple point of sales system, but it was effective and that sort of stuff so then we upgraded that to Clipper and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system . Bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sales .
Revised:  It was a simple point of sales system, but it was effective and that sort of stuff so then we upgraded that to Clipper and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system , we had bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sales .
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Original:  It was a simple point of sales system, but it was effective and that sort of stuff so then we upgraded that to Clipper and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system . Bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sales .
Revised:  It was a simple point of sales system, but it was effective and that sort of stuff so then we upgraded that to Clipper and I started programming object orientated while I was there, and wrote the whole booking system . Bookings for the pools, learn-to-swim bookings, point of sale .
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Original:  Yes. Tom Kyle: That 's when I started my own company.
Revised:  Yes. Tom Kyle: So that 's when I started my own company.
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Original:  It then allowed me  to become an entrepreneur of my own, so I wrote my own software, and started selling a leisure package which  managed leisure centres around the country.
Revised:  It then allowed me then to become an entrepreneur of my own, so I wrote my own software, and started selling a leisure package which managed leisure centres around the country.
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Original:  It then allowed me  to become an entrepreneur of my own, so I wrote my own software, and started selling a leisure package which  managed leisure centres around the country.
Revised:  It then allowed me to become an entrepreneur of my own, so I wrote my own software, and started selling a leisure package which basically managed leisure centres around the country.
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Original:  I ended up employing ten people in my company, which was quite good,  through to, I suppose, 1997  , somewhere in there.
Revised:  I ended up employing ten people in my company, which was quite good, right through to, I suppose, 1997 , somewhere in there.
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Original:  I ended up employing ten people in my company, which was quite good,  through to, I suppose, 1997  , somewhere in there.
Revised:  I ended up employing ten people in my company, which was quite good, through to, I suppose, 1997 ? , somewhere in there.
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Original:  And then in 2000 I decided to give that away and went to work for . But of a change.
Revised:  And then in 2000 I decided to give that away and went to work for . Bit of a change.
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Original:  I started as an IT business analyst and ended up as a product development manager.
Revised:  I started as a business analyst and ended up as a product development manager.
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Original:  I had been coaching full time as the head coach, coordinator of all the coaches and convener of  sport for the school.
Revised:  I had been coaching full time as the head coach, coordinator of all the coaches and convener of the sport for the school.
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Original:  Didn't win it but  did quite well.
Revised:  Didn't win it but , did quite well.
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Original:  Been offered another opportunity to go to , which was a rival school in Brisbane, across the river.
Revised:  Been offered another opportunity to go to , which was a competing school across the other side of the river.
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Original:  (evil laugh) [ A common thing Tom Kyle: But it was in Suncorp Metway where I got into wheelchair basketball.
Revised:  [ A common thing Tom Kyle: But it was in Suncorp Metway where I got into wheelchair basketball.
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Original:  (evil laugh) [ A common thing Tom Kyle: But it was in Suncorp Metway where I got into wheelchair basketball.
Revised:  (evil laugh) [evil laugh A common thing Tom Kyle: But it was in Suncorp Metway where I got into wheelchair basketball.
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Original:  [evil laugh] A common thing  Tom Kyle: But it was in Suncorp Metway where I got into wheelchair basketball.
Revised:  [evil laugh] A common thing . Tom Kyle: But it was in Suncorp Metway where I got into wheelchair basketball.
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