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Original:  In Chironomia, Austin quotes extensively from Cicero ’ s De oratore and Quintilian's Institutio oratoria.
Revised:  In Chironomia, Austin quotes extensively from Cicero ' s De oratore and Quintilian's Institutio oratoria.
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Original:  Austin's work would appear to be a direct descendent of John Bulwer ’ s book Chirologia, or, The natural language of the hand which, when it was published in 1644, also included Bulwer's work Chironomia;
Revised:  Austin's work would appear to be a direct descendent of John Bulwer ' s book Chirologia, or, The natural language of the hand which, when it was published in 1644, also included Bulwer's work Chironomia;
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Original:  By following Austin ’ s guidelines, speakers could improve their delivery by matching their gestures to their words.
Revised:  By following Austin ' s guidelines, speakers could improve their delivery by matching their gestures to their words.
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Original:  Transactions of the Royal Irish Academy 1803. 3-9. ---. "Description of a Portable Barometer."
Revised:  Transactions of the Royal Irish Academy 1803. 3–9. ---. "Description of a Portable Barometer."
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Original:  Transactions of the Royal Irish Academy 1790. 99-105. ---. "On a New Construction of a Condenser and Air-Pump." Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society of London 1813. 138-145.
Revised:  Transactions of the Royal Irish Academy 1790. 99–105. ---. "On a New Construction of a Condenser and Air-Pump." Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society of London 1813. 138-145.
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Original:  Transactions of the Royal Irish Academy 1790. 99-105. ---. "On a New Construction of a Condenser and Air-Pump." Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society of London 1813. 138-145.
Revised:  Transactions of the Royal Irish Academy 1790. 99-105. ---. "On a New Construction of a Condenser and Air-Pump." Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society of London 1813. 138–145.
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Original:  Southern Speech Journal 34 (Fall 1968): 17-27.
Revised:  Southern Speech Journal 34 (Fall 1968): 17–27.
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Original:  Democratic Review December 1844. 580-594.
Revised:  Democratic Review December 1844. 580–594.
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Original:  "Editor ’ s Introduction."
Revised:  "Editor ' s Introduction."
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Original:  Austin, Chironomia ix-xxi .
Revised:  Austin, Chironomia ix–xxi .
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Original:  Spoel, Philippa M. "The Science of Bodily Rhetoric in Gilbert Austin ’ s Chironomia."
Revised:  Spoel, Philippa M. "The Science of Bodily Rhetoric in Gilbert Austin ' s Chironomia."
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Original:  Rhetoric Society Quarterly 28 (Fall 1998): 5-27.
Revised:  Rhetoric Society Quarterly 28 (Fall 1998): 5–27.
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Original: Gilbert Austin (1753–1837) was an Irish educator, clergyman , and author.
Revised: Gilbert Austin (1753–1837) was an Irish educator, clergyman and author.
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Original:  In the first part of the book, Austin traces the study of the art of delivery from the classical world to the eighteenth century.
Revised:  In the first part of the book, Austin traces the study of the art of delivery from the classical world to the 18th century.
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Original:  The system of notation is accompanied by a series of illustrations depicting positions of the feet, body , and hands.
Revised:  The system of notation is accompanied by a series of illustrations depicting positions of the feet, body and hands.
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Original:  Although Austin's system was eventually dismissed as too rigidly prescriptive, Chironomia was a highly influential book during the nineteenth century.
Revised:  Although Austin's system was eventually dismissed as too rigidly prescriptive, Chironomia was a highly influential book during the 19th century.
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Original:  Austin's work would appear to be a direct descendent of John Bulwer's book Chirologia, or, The natural language of the hand which, when it was published in 1644, also included Bulwer's work Chironomia;
Revised:  Austin's work would appear to be a direct descendent of John Bulwer's book Chirologia, or, the Natural Language of the Hand which, when it was published in 1644, also included Bulwer's work Chironomia;
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Original:  or, The art of manual rhetoricke .
Revised:  or, the Art of Manual Rhetoricke .
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Original:  Austin developed rules for the management of articulation, pronunciation , and emphasis.
Revised:  Austin developed rules for the management of articulation, pronunciation and emphasis.
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Original:  On articulation, Austin writes [words] are to be delivered out from the lips, as beautiful coins newly issued from the mint, deeply and accurately impressed, perfectly finished, neatly struck by the proper organs, distinct, sharp, in due succession , and of due weight.
Revised:  On articulation, Austin writes [words] are to be delivered out from the lips, as beautiful coins newly issued from the mint, deeply and accurately impressed, perfectly finished, neatly struck by the proper organs, distinct, sharp, in due succession and of due weight.
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Original:  In addition to his rules for the management of the voice, Austin also addresses issues of vocal quality including pitch, volume , and variety.
Revised:  In addition to his rules for the management of the voice, Austin also addresses issues of vocal quality including pitch, volume and variety.
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Original:  Austin stresses the importance of using appropriate tones of voice, facial expressions , and gestures to convey sincerity.
Revised:  Austin stresses the importance of using appropriate tones of voice, facial expressions and gestures to convey sincerity.
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Original:  During the eighteenth century, speakers preferred the natural style of gesture but Austin warns against this style saying that speakers who rely on nature run the risk of displaying "the untutored extravagance and uncouth motions of the vulgar" (138 see Plate 2, Figures 8 and 9 below).
Revised:  During the 18th century, speakers preferred the natural style of gesture but Austin warns against this style saying that speakers who rely on nature run the risk of displaying "the untutored extravagance and uncouth motions of the vulgar" (138 see Plate 2, Figures 8 and 9 below).
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Original:  The speaker then moves his or her body, feet , or hands toward one of the points on the sphere.
Revised:  The speaker then moves his or her body, feet or hands toward one of the points on the sphere.
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Original:  Illustrations The text of Chironomia is accompanied by 12 engraved plates depicting various positions of the feet, arms , and body.
Revised:  Illustrations The text of Chironomia is accompanied by 12 engraved plates depicting various positions of the feet, arms and body.
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Original:  150px|"The position of the orator is equally removed from the awkwardness of the rustic with toes turned in and knees bent, and from the affectation of the dancing-master, constrained and prepared for springing agility , and for conceited display" (Chironomia Plate 1, Figures 8, 9).
Revised:  150px|"The position of the orator is equally removed from the awkwardness of the rustic with toes turned in and knees bent, and from the affectation of the dancing-master, constrained and prepared for springing agility and for conceited display" (Chironomia Plate 1, Figures 8, 9).
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Original:  By the end of the nineteenth century, however, Chironomia had fallen from favour.
Revised:  By the end of the 19th century, however, Chironomia had fallen from favour.
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Original:  Southern Speech Journal 34 ( Fall 1968): 17–27.
Revised:  Southern Speech Journal 34 ( Autumn 1968): 17–27.
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Original:  Robb, Mary Margaret , and Lester Thonssen.
Revised:  Robb, Mary Margaret and Lester Thonssen.
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Original:  Rhetoric Society Quarterly 28 ( Fall 1998): 5–27.
Revised:  Rhetoric Society Quarterly 28 ( Autumn 1998): 5–27.
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Original: Benefits of CAA Compared to traditional auscultation, omputer-aided auscultation (CAA) offers a range of improvements beneficial to multiple stakeholders: CAA can yield more accurate and objective results and is likely to outperform the auscultation skills and subjective interpretation of humans.
Revised: Benefits of CAA Compared to traditional auscultation, computer-aided auscultation (CAA) offers a range of improvements beneficial to multiple stakeholders: CAA can yield more accurate and objective results and is likely to outperform the auscultation skills and subjective interpretation of humans.
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Original:  He won Kerala Sangeeta Nataka Akademi Award for the best thayambaka URL
Revised:  He won Kerala Sangeeta Nataka Akademi Award for the best thayambaka artist.
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Original:  Additionally, she wears a crescent and Christian cross necklace (observable here) and criticised the military, rather than either sect, for sectarian clashes that have erupted in the wake of the revolution.
Revised:  Additionally, she wears a crescent and Christian cross necklace (observable here) and criticized the military, rather than either sect, for sectarian clashes that have erupted in the wake of the revolution.
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Original: Bothaina Kamel ( ) ( born in Cairo, 18 April 1962) is an Egyptian television anchor, activist, and politician.
Revised: Bothaina Kamel ( ; born in Cairo, 18 April 1962) is an Egyptian television anchor, activist, and politician.
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Original:  A long time pro-democracy advocate, particularly in Shayfeencom, her professional career has been marked by repeated conflict with authorities.
Revised:  A long-time pro-democracy advocate, particularly in Shayfeencom, her professional career has been marked by repeated conflict with authorities.
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Original:  Kamel hosted a popular Egyptian radio program called "Nighttime Confessions " from 1992 to 1998.
Revised:  Kamel hosted an Egyptian radio program called "Nighttime Confessions " from 1992 to 1998.
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Original:  Kamel hosted a popular Egyptian radio program called "Nighttime Confessions " from 1992 to 1998.
Revised:  Kamel hosted a popular Egyptian radio program called Nighttime Confessions from 1992 to 1998.
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Original:  She later worked as a new presenter for Egyptian state television, and hosted a show called " Please Understand Me " on the Saudi Arabian-owned Orbit satellite TV network.
Revised:  She later worked as a new presenter for Egyptian state television, and hosted a show called Please Understand Me " on the Saudi Arabian-owned Orbit satellite TV network.
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Original:  She later worked as a new presenter for Egyptian state television, and hosted a show called " Please Understand Me " on the Saudi Arabian-owned Orbit satellite TV network.
Revised:  She later worked as a new presenter for Egyptian state television, and hosted a show called " Please Understand Me on the Saudi Arabian-owned Orbit satellite TV network.
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Original:  In each assignment, she eventually encountered official resistance: "Confessions " was cancelled after outcries by religious conservatives;
Revised:  In each assignment, she eventually encountered official resistance: Confessions was cancelled after outcries by religious conservatives;
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Original:  and "Understand Me " was taken off the air by the Saudi producers when they became concerned that its coverage of the 2011 Egyptian revolution would implicate Saudi interests.
Revised:  and Understand Me was taken off the air by the Saudi producers when they became concerned that its coverage of the 2011 Egyptian revolution would implicate Saudi interests.
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Original:  She is a self-described social democrat, and is ran as an independent.
Revised:  She is a self-described social democrat, and ran as an independent.
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Original:  Additionally, she wears a crescent and Christian cross necklace (observable here ) and criticized the military, rather than either sect, for sectarian clashes that have erupted in the wake of the revolution.
Revised:  Additionally, she wears a crescent and Christian cross necklaceobservable here and criticized the military, rather than either sect, for sectarian clashes that have erupted in the wake of the revolution.
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Original:  Additionally, she wears a Muslim crescent and a Christian cross necklace both are symbols of Egyptian unity and also were the symbol of the 1919 Egyptian Revolutionobservable here .
Revised:  Additionally, she wears a Muslim crescent and a Christian cross necklace both are symbols of Egyptian unity and also were the symbol of the 1919 Egyptian Revolution .
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Original: The Sudanese conflict in South Kordofan and Blue Nile is an armed conflict in the Sudanese southern states of South Kordofan and Blue Nile between the Sudanese Army (SAF) and Sudan People's Liberation Movement-North (SPLM-N), a northern affiliate of the Sudan People's Liberation Movement (SPLM) in South Sudan.
Revised: The Sudanese conflict in South Kordofan and Blue Nile was an armed conflict in the Sudanese southern states of South Kordofan and Blue Nile between the Sudanese Army (SAF) and Sudan People's Liberation Movement-North (SPLM-N), a northern affiliate of the Sudan People's Liberation Movement (SPLM) in South Sudan.
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Original: The Sudanese conflict in South Kordofan and Blue Nile was an armed conflict in the Sudanese southern states of South Kordofan and Blue Nile between the Sudanese Army (SAF) and Sudan People's Liberation Movement-North (SPLM-N), a northern affiliate of the Sudan People's Liberation Movement (SPLM) in South Sudan.
Revised: The Sudanese conflict in South Kordofan and Blue Nile is an armed conflict in the Sudanese southern states of South Kordofan and Blue Nile between the Sudanese Army (SAF) and Sudan People's Liberation Movement-North (SPLM-N), a northern affiliate of the Sudan People's Liberation Movement (SPLM) in South Sudan.
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Original:  ANAM provides clinicians and researchers with data to evaluate an individual’s neurocognitive status at a point-in-time and changes in cognitive status over time.
Revised:  ANAM provides clinicians and researchers with tests to evaluate changes in an individual’s neurocognitive status at a point-in-time and changes in cognitive status over time.
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Original:  ANAM provides clinicians and researchers with data to evaluate an individual’s neurocognitive status at a point-in-time and changes in cognitive status over time.
Revised:  ANAM provides clinicians and researchers with data to evaluate an individual’s cognitive status over time.
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Original:  Initially developed, tested and implemented in the Department of Defense , the U.S. Army Technology Transfer program exclusively licensed the technology to  Vista LifeSciences ( www. vistalifesciences.com) .
Revised:  Initially developed, tested and implemented in the Department of Defense , the U.S. Army Technology Transfer program exclusively licensed the technology to Vista LifeSciences ( vistalifesciences.com) .
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Original:  • select batteries of cognitive assessments from the    ANAM library , • a data extraction and presentation tool for custom analysis and data management , • a performance report tool for reporting on individual neurocognitive performance with comparisons to previous assessment sessions and relevant reference groups.
Revised:  • select batteries of cognitive assessments from the ANAM library , • a data extraction and presentation tool for custom analysis and data management A performance report tool for reporting on individual neurocognitive performance with comparisons to previous assessment sessions and relevant reference groups.
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Original:  • select batteries of cognitive assessments from the    ANAM library , • a data extraction and presentation tool for custom analysis and data management , • a performance report tool for reporting on individual neurocognitive performance with comparisons to previous assessment sessions and relevant reference groups.
Revised:  • select batteries of cognitive assessments from the ANAM library , • a data extraction and presentation tool for custom analysis and data management , • a performance report tool for reporting on individual neurocognitive tests with comparisons to previous assessment sessions and relevant reference groups.
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Original:  • select batteries of cognitive assessments from the    ANAM library , • a data extraction and presentation tool for custom analysis and data management , • a performance report tool for reporting on individual neurocognitive performance with comparisons to previous assessment sessions and relevant reference groups.
Revised:  • select batteries of cognitive assessments from the ANAM library , • a data extraction and presentation tool for custom analysis and data management , • a performance report tool for reporting on individual neurocognitive performance with comparisons to previous assessment sessions 
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Original:  Assessment Tests and Tools ANAM4 includes 22 assessment tests and tools that are highly sensitive to cognitive change in:
Revised:  ANAM4 includes 22 assessment tests and tools that are highly sensitive to cognitive change in:
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Original:  Assessment Tests and Tools ANAM4 includes 22 assessment tests and tools that are highly sensitive to cognitive change in:
Revised:  Assessment Tests and Tools ANAM4 includes 22 individual tests sensitive to cognitive change in:
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Original:  • Attention • Concentration • Reaction time • Memory • Processing speed • Decision-making • Executive function ANAM assessment batteries have been used in research and clinical use associated with injury (e.g., trauma, blast) illness(e.g., degenerative disease), exposure(e.g., toxin), risk factors(e.g., heat/cold, sleep loss, fatigue), and intervention(e. g., medication, rehabilitation).
Revised:  Attention Concentration Reaction time Memory Processing speed Decision-making • Executive function ANAM assessment batteries have been used in research and clinical use associated with injury (e.g., trauma, blast) illness(e.g., degenerative disease), exposure(e.g., toxin), risk factors(e.g., heat/cold, sleep loss, fatigue), and intervention(e. g., medication, rehabilitation).
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Original:  • Attention • Concentration • Reaction time • Memory • Processing speed • Decision-making • Executive function ANAM assessment batteries have been used in research and clinical use associated with injury (e.g., trauma, blast) illness(e.g., degenerative disease), exposure(e.g., toxin), risk factors(e.g., heat/cold, sleep loss, fatigue), and intervention(e. g., medication, rehabilitation).
Revised:  • Attention • Concentration • Reaction time • Memory • Processing speed • Decision-making Executive function ANAM assessment batteries have been used in research and clinical use associated with injury (e.g., trauma, blast) illness(e.g., degenerative disease), exposure(e.g., toxin), risk factors(e.g., heat/cold, sleep loss, fatigue), and intervention(e. g., medication, rehabilitation).
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Original:  • Attention • Concentration • Reaction time • Memory • Processing speed • Decision-making • Executive function ANAM assessment batteries have been used in research and clinical use associated with injury (e.g., trauma, blast) illness(e.g., degenerative disease), exposure(e.g., toxin), risk factors(e.g., heat/cold, sleep loss, fatigue), and intervention(e. g., medication, rehabilitation).
Revised:  • Attention • Concentration • Reaction time • Memory • Processing speed • Decision-making • Executive function ANAM assessment batteries have been used in research and clinical work associated with injury (e.g., trauma, blast) illness(e.g., degenerative disease), exposure(e.g., toxin), risk factors(e.g., heat/cold, sleep loss, fatigue), and intervention(e. g., medication, rehabilitation).
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Original:  • Attention • Concentration • Reaction time • Memory • Processing speed • Decision-making • Executive function ANAM assessment batteries have been used in research and clinical use associated with injury (e.g., trauma, blast) illness(e.g., degenerative disease), exposure(e.g., toxin), risk factors(e.g., heat/cold, sleep loss, fatigue), and intervention(e. g., medication, rehabilitation).
Revised:  • Attention • Concentration • Reaction time • Memory • Processing speed • Decision-making • Executive function ANAM assessment batteries have been used in research and clinical use associated with injury , illness, exposure, risk factors, and intervention.
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Original:  ANAM assessment tests and tools include: • Symptoms Scale • 2-Choice Reaction Time • Code Substitution (Learning, Immediate, and Delayed) • Effort Measure • Go/No-Go (Executive Function) • Logical Relations- Symbolic • Manikin • Matching Grids • Matching  to Sample • Mathematical Processing • Memory Search • Mood Scale II –
Revised:  ANAM assessment tests and tools include: Symptoms Scale 2-Choice Reaction Time • Code Substitution (Learning, Immediate, and Delayed) • Effort Measure • Go/No-Go (Executive Function) • Logical Relations- Symbolic • Manikin • Matching Grids • Matching to Sample • Mathematical Processing • Memory Search • Mood Scale II –
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Original:  ANAM assessment tests and tools include: • Symptoms Scale • 2-Choice Reaction Time • Code Substitution (Learning, Immediate, and Delayed) • Effort Measure • Go/No-Go (Executive Function) • Logical Relations- Symbolic • Manikin • Matching Grids • Matching  to Sample • Mathematical Processing • Memory Search • Mood Scale II –
Revised:  ANAM assessment tests and tools include: • Symptoms Scale • 2-Choice Reaction Time Code Substitution (Learning, Immediate, and Delayed) • Effort Measure • Go/No-Go (Executive Function) • Logical Relations- Symbolic • Manikin • Matching Grids • Matching to Sample • Mathematical Processing • Memory Search • Mood Scale II –
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Original:  ANAM assessment tests and tools include: • Symptoms Scale • 2-Choice Reaction Time • Code Substitution (Learning, Immediate, and Delayed) • Effort Measure • Go/No-Go (Executive Function) • Logical Relations- Symbolic • Manikin • Matching Grids • Matching  to Sample • Mathematical Processing • Memory Search • Mood Scale II –
Revised:  ANAM assessment tests and tools include: • Symptoms Scale • 2-Choice Reaction Time • Code Substitution (Learning, Immediate, and Delayed) • Effort Measure • Go/No-Go (Executive Function) Logical Relations- Symbolic • Manikin • Matching Grids • Matching to Sample • Mathematical Processing • Memory Search • Mood Scale II –
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Original:  ANAM assessment tests and tools include: • Symptoms Scale • 2-Choice Reaction Time • Code Substitution (Learning, Immediate, and Delayed) • Effort Measure • Go/No-Go (Executive Function) • Logical Relations- Symbolic • Manikin • Matching Grids • Matching  to Sample • Mathematical Processing • Memory Search • Mood Scale II –
Revised:  ANAM assessment tests and tools include: • Symptoms Scale • 2-Choice Reaction Time • Code Substitution (Learning, Immediate, and Delayed) • Effort Measure • Go/No-Go (Executive Function) • Logical Relations- Symbolic Manikin Matching to Sample • Mathematical Processing • Memory Search • Mood Scale II –
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