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Original:  The Defence Department said Thursday that it was conducting tests to determine the dioxin level in the soil and consulting with the U.S. military to find out the exact carcinogen levels in the sprays used . category: North America category: Canada category: Heal
Revised:  The Defence Department said Thursday that it was conducting tests to determine the dioxin level in the soil and consulting with the U.S. military to find out the exact carcinogen levels in the sprays used category: North America category: Canada category: Heal
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Original:  The Defence Department said Thursday that it was conducting tests to determine the dioxin level in the soil and consulting with the U.S. military to find out the exact carcinogen levels in the sprays used . category: North America category: Canada category: Heal
Revised:  The Defence Department said Thursday that it was conducting tests to determine the dioxin level in the soil and consulting with the U.S. military to find out the exact carcinogen levels in the sprays used . 
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Original:  The judge sentenced Killen to  maximum 20 years for each count -- a total of 60 years.
Revised:  The judge sentenced Killen to the maximum 20 years for each count -- a total of 60 years.
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Original:  Judge Gordon noted thaat 10 years would likely be a life sentence for Killen.
Revised:  Judge Gordon noted that 10 years would likely be a life sentence for Killen.
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Original:  The conviction came 41 years to the day after the three, James Chaney, Michael Schwerner , and Andrew Goodman , were murdered.
Revised:  The conviction came 41 years to the day after James Chaney, Michael Schwerner , and Andrew Goodman , were murdered.
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Original:  The conviction came 41 years to the day after the three, James Chaney, Michael Schwerner , and Andrew Goodman , were murdered.
Revised:  The conviction came 41 years to the day after the three, James Chaney, Michael Schwerner and Andrew Goodman , were murdered.
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Original:  The conviction came 41 years to the day after the three, James Chaney, Michael Schwerner , and Andrew Goodman , were murdered.
Revised:  The conviction came 41 years to the day after the three, James Chaney, Michael Schwerner , and Andrew Goodman were murdered.
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Original:  Judge Gordon noted that 10 years would likely be a life sentence  for Killen.
Revised:  Judge Gordon noted some people "would say a sentence of 10 years would likely be a life sentence for Killen.
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Original:  Judge Gordon noted that 10 years would likely be a life sentence  for Killen.
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Original:  Judge Gordon noted that 10 years would likely be a life sentence  for Killen.
Revised:  Judge Gordon noted that 10 years would likely be a life sentence " for Killen.
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Original: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edward Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of threes counts of manslaughter in the slayings of three civil rights workers in 1964.
Revised: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edward Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of three counts of manslaughter in the slayings of three civil rights workers in 1964.
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Original: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edward Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of three counts of manslaughter in the slayings of three civil rights workers  in 1964.
Revised: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edgar Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of three counts of manslaughter in the slayings of three civil rights workers in 1964.
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Original: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edward Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of three counts of manslaughter in the slayings of three civil rights workers  in 1964.
Revised: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edward Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of three counts of manslaughter in the slaying of three civil rights workers in 1964.
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Original: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edward Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of three counts of manslaughter in the slayings of three civil rights workers  in 1964.
Revised: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edward Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of three counts of manslaughter in the slayings of three civil rights workers | in 1964.
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Original:  They had been registering minority votes in Mississippi during the " freedom summer " of 1964.
Revised:  They had been registering minority votes in Mississippi during the " Freedom Summer " of 1964.
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Original: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edgar Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of three counts of manslaughter in the slaying of three civil rights workers | in 1964.
Revised: Judge Marcus Gordon passed sentence on 80 year old Edgar Ray Killen who was convicted Tuesday of three counts of manslaughter in the slaying of three civil rights workers in 1964.
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Original:  Soccarras previously worked in at various factories making dolls, dresses  and blouses.
Revised:  Soccarras previously worked at various factories making dolls, dresses and blouses.
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Original:  Soccarras previously worked in at various factories making dolls, dresses  and blouses.
Revised:  Soccarras previously worked in at various factories making dolls, dresses , and blouses.
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Original:  She never married  and had one daughter, who refused to comment to media outlets.
Revised:  She never married , and had one daughter, who refused to comment to media outlets.
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Original: Four officers in the Oakland police department were shot around the 7400 block of the city's MacArthur Boulevard at approximately 1:15 PM Pacific Daylight Time after two motorcycle officers pulled over another vehicle , after which they were both fired upon by the suspect driving the car.
Revised: Four officers in the Oakland police department were shot around the 7400 block of the city's MacArthur Boulevard at approximately 1:15 PM Pacific Daylight Time after two motorcycle officers pulled over another vehicle . After doing so, the officers were both fired upon by the suspect driving the car.
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Original:  At approximately 3:20 p.m. (PDT) , an unnamed caller reported sight of the suspects on a near street, East 27th Street, causing police to create a blockade, surrounding the suspect.
Revised:  At approximately 3:20 p.m. , an unnamed caller reported sight of the suspects on a near street, East 27th Street, causing police to create a blockade, surrounding the suspect.
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Original: Four officers in the Oakland police department were shot around the 7400 block of the city's MacArthur Boulevard at approximately 1:15 p.m. (PDT) on March 21, after two motorcycle officers pulled over another vehicle.
Revised: The shooting began around the 7400 block of the city's MacArthur Boulevard at approximately 1:15 p.m. (PDT) on March 21, after two motorcycle officers pulled over another vehicle.
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Original:  There names were: Sargent Erv Romans, aged 43, Sargent Dan Sakai, 35, John Hege aged 41 and Mark Dunakin, 40.
Revised:  Their names were: Sargent Erv Romans, aged 43, Sargent Dan Sakai, 35, John Hege aged 41 and Mark Dunakin, 40.
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Original:  The suspects name was Lovelle Mixon, aged 26, who had a warrant issued for his arrest after his bail was revoked for violation of parole.
Revised:  The suspect's name was Lovelle Mixon, aged 26, who had a warrant issued for his arrest after his bail was revoked for violation of parole.
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Original: All four police officers shot by a parolee+pa in Oakland, California on March 21, have died in local hospitals, according to reports.
Revised: All four police officers shot in Oakland, California on March 21, have died in local hospitals, according to reports.
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Original: "A number of people at the alliance are looking at Rasmussen as a leading candidate, but there's been no decision yet and it takes a consensus." said a senior United States official .
Revised: "A number of people at the alliance are looking at Rasmussen as a leading candidate, but there's been no decision yet and it takes a consensus." said a senior United States official 
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Original:  File:Anders Fogh Rasmussen - World Economic Forum Annual Meeting Davos 2008.jpg|120px|Prime Minister of Denmark, Anders Fogh Rasmusse
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Original:  And the world's depending on us.  
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Original:  At Kandahar International Airport  , over 3,000 NATO soldiers honoured the four newly fallen Canadians who paid the ultimate sacrifice and are now returning home.
Revised:  At Kandahar International Airport in Afghanistan , over 3,000 NATO soldiers honoured the four newly fallen Canadians who paid the ultimate sacrifice and are now returning home.
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Original:  At Kandahar International Airport  , over 3,000 NATO soldiers honoured the four newly fallen Canadians who paid the ultimate sacrifice and are now returning home.
Revised:  At Kandahar International Airport , over 3,000 NATO soldiers honoured four recently fallen Canadians who paid the ultimate sacrifice and are now returning home.
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Original:  At Kandahar International Airport  , over 3,000 NATO soldiers honoured the four newly fallen Canadians who paid the ultimate sacrifice and are now returning home.
Revised:  At Kandahar International Airport , over 3,000 NATO soldiers honoured the four newly fallen Canadians who died in combat and are now returning home.
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Original:  A separate bomb incident in Kandahar City killed the Troopers Corey Joseph Hayes and Jack Bouthillier of the Royal Canadian Dragoons.
Revised:  A separate bomb incident in Kandahar City killed Troopers Corey Joseph Hayes and Jack Bouthillier of the Royal Canadian Dragoons.
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Original:  Accoring to Canwest news services , Canada will end its part in the combat mission in 2011
Revised:  According to Canwest News Service , Canada will end its part in the combat mission in 2011
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Original: File:Kandahar International Airport during at night.jpg|180px| Kandahar International Airport at night On Sunday, at Kandahar International Airport in Afghanistan, over 3,000 NATO soldiers honoured four recently fallen Canadians who died in combat and returned home on Monday.
Revised:  On Sunday, at Kandahar International Airport in Afghanistan, over 3,000 NATO soldiers honoured four recently fallen Canadians who died in combat and returned home on Monday.
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Original: File: Goody.jpg|Jade Goody: 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has died today after a long battle with cervical cancer in Upshire, Essex ,  England at the age of 27, which was Mother's Day in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
Revised: : 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has died today after a long battle with cervical cancer in Upshire, Essex , England at the age of 27, which was Mother's Day in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
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Original: File: Goody.jpg|Jade Goody: 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has died today after a long battle with cervical cancer in Upshire, Essex ,  England at the age of 27, which was Mother's Day in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
Revised: File: Goody.jpg|Jade Goody: 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity of fame has died today after a long battle with cervical cancer in Upshire, Essex , England at the age of 27, which was Mother's Day in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
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Original: File: Goody.jpg|Jade Goody: 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has died today after a long battle with cervical cancer in Upshire, Essex ,  England at the age of 27, which was Mother's Day in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
Revised: File: Goody.jpg|Jade Goody: 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has died today after a long battle with in , England at the age of 27, which was Mother's Day in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
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Original: File: Goody.jpg|Jade Goody: 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has died today after a long battle with cervical cancer in Upshire, Essex ,  England at the age of 27, which was Mother's Day in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
Revised: File: Goody.jpg|Jade Goody: 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has died today after a long battle with cervical cancer in Upshire, Essex , , England at the age of 27, which was Mother's Day in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
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Original: File: Goody.jpg|Jade Goody: 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has died today after a long battle with cervical cancer in Upshire, Essex ,  England at the age of 27, which was Mother's Day in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
Revised: File: Goody.jpg|Jade Goody: 1981 - 2009 British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has died today after a long battle with cervical cancer in Upshire, Essex , England at the age of 27, which was in the UK, and the one month anniversary of her marriage to Jack Tweed.
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Original:  She was born Jade Cerisa Lorraine Goody on June 5, 1981 in Bermondsey, London ,  England.
Revised:  She was born Jade Cerisa Lorraine Goody on June 5, 1981 in , England.
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Original:  She was born Jade Cerisa Lorraine Goody on June 5, 1981 in Bermondsey, London ,  England.
Revised:  She was born Jade Cerisa Lorraine Goody on June 5, 1981 in Bermondsey, London , , England.
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Original:  In January 2007, she was a housemate in Celebrity Big Brother . During the show she was accused of racist bullying against Indian actress Shilpa Shetty.
Revised:  In January 2007, she was a housemate in . During the show she was accused of racist bullying against Indian actress Shilpa Shetty.
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Original:  The funeral will take place next Sunday, which is described by Max Clifford , Goody's publicist as a "Jade Goody Production".
Revised:  The funeral will take place next Sunday, which is described by , Goody's publicist as a "Jade Goody Production".
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Original:   Sunday, far-right youths clashed with far-left activists in Paris, France, who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source  said.
Revised:  On Sunday, far-right youths clashed with far-left activists in Paris, France, who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source said.
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Original:   Sunday, far-right youths clashed with far-left activists in Paris, France, who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source  said.
Revised:  Sunday, far-right youth clashed with far-left activists in Paris, France, who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source said.
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Original:   Sunday, far-right youths clashed with far-left activists in Paris, France, who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source  said.
Revised:  Sunday, far-right youths clashed with far-left activists who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source said.
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Original:   Sunday, far-right youths clashed with far-left activists in Paris, France, who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source  said.
Revised:  Sunday, far-right youths clashed with far-left activists in Paris, France, who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source in Paris, France said.
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Original:  One person got injured.
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Original:  On Tuesday  the Pope stated at the beginning of his travels through Africa that "you can't resolve it [AIDS] with the distribution of condoms.
Revised:  On Tuesday , the Pope stated at the beginning of his travels through Africa that "you can't resolve it [AIDS] with the distribution of condoms.
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Original: On Sunday, far-right youth clashed with far-left activists who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source in Paris, France said.
Revised: Far-right and far-left activists who were protesting against Pope Benedict's opposition to condoms, a police source in Paris, France said.
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Original:  [[File:BentoXVI-15-10052007.jpg|Pope Benedict's ]] The police arrested three persons after clashes between the protesters and youths associated with far-right, which were carrying signs that said "Leave my Pope alone"  .
Revised:  [[File:BentoXVI-15-10052007.jpg|Pope Benedict's ]] The police arrested three persons after clashes between the protesters and youths associated with far-right, which were carrying signs that reading "Leave my Pope alone" .
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Original:  On Tuesday,  the Pope stated at the beginning of his travels through Africa that "you can't resolve it [AIDS] with the distribution of condoms.
Revised:  On Tuesday, the Pope stated said that "you can't resolve it [AIDS] with the distribution of condoms.
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Original:  On Monday the Pope returns to The Vatican
Revised:  Today, the Pope returns to The Vatican
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Original: Far-right and far-left activists clashed Sunday, when the far-left were protesting Pope Benedict  's opposition to condoms, a police source in Paris, France said.
Revised: Far-right and far-left activists clashed Sunday, when the far-left were protesting Pope Benedict XVI 's opposition to condoms, a police source in Paris, France said.
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Original:  File:BentoXVI-15-10052007.jpg|Pope Benedict The police arrested three people after the incident.
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Original:  About 20 youth , some of whom were carrying signs reading "Leave my Pope alone" approached the protesters.
Revised:  About 20 youths , some of whom were carrying signs reading "Leave my Pope alone" approached the protesters.
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Original: On Tuesday, after arriving in Africa, the Pope stated said that "you can't resolve it [AIDS] with the distribution of condoms.
Revised: On Tuesday, after arriving in Africa, the Pope stated that "you can't resolve it [AIDS] with the distribution of condoms.
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Original: On Monday  , a FedEx McDonnell Douglas MD-11 cargo jet flying from Guangzhou, China to Tokyo, Japan crash-landed at Tokyo's Narita International Airport at around 7 a . m. local time.
Revised: On Monday morning , a FedEx McDonnell Douglas MD-11 cargo jet flying from Guangzhou, China to Tokyo, Japan crash-landed at Tokyo's Narita International Airport at around 7 a . m. local time.
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Original:  Firecrews were dispatched to the scene, and the airport was closed.
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Original:  Wind gusts around the time of the accident were 30 to 50 mph.
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Original:  The pilots, Kevin Mosley and Anthony Stephen-Pino, were taken to a local hospital  where they were pronounced dead.
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Original:  The pilots, Kevin Mosley and Anthony Stephen-Pino, were taken to a local hospital  where they were pronounced dead.
Revised:  The pilots, Kevin Mosley and Anthony Stephen-Pino, were taken to a local hospital , where they were pronounced dead.
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Original:  The National Transportation Safety Board said it is deploying a team to Japan to assist with the investigation.
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Original:  The National Transportation Safety Board said it is deploying a team to Japan to assist with the investigation.
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Original:  The Construction and Transport Ministry suspects a strong gust of wind hit the plane, citing 64 kph (40 mph) winds reported.
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Original:  The two pilots were taken to a local hospital, where they were pronounced dead.
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Original:   Also the U.S. National Transportation Safety Board said it would deploy a team to Japan to assist with investigation .
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Original: On Monday morning, a FedEx McDonnell Douglas MD-11 cargo jet flying from  Guangzhou, China to Narita, Japan crashed while landing then burnt, killing two American pilots.
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Original: On Monday morning, a FedEx McDonnell Douglas MD-11 cargo jet flying from  Guangzhou, China to Narita, Japan crashed while landing then burnt, killing two American pilots.
Revised: On Monday morning, a FedEx McDonnell Douglas MD-11 cargo jet flying from w: Guangzhou, China to Narita, Japan crashed while landing then burnt, killing two American pilots.
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Original:  A team of officials from FedEx Corp. arrived in Japan Tuesday morning to take part in the investigation .
Revised:  A team of officials from FedEx Corp. arrived in Japan Tuesday morning .
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Original:  Also the U.S. National Transportation Safety Board said it would deploy a team to Japan to assist .
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Original: On Monday morning , a FedEx  MD-11 cargo jet flying from w: Guangzhou, China to Narita, Japan crashed while landing then burnt, killing two American pilots.
Revised: On Monday , a FedEx MD-11 cargo jet flying from w: Guangzhou, China to Narita, Japan crashed while landing then burnt, killing two American pilots.
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Original: On Monday morning , a FedEx  MD-11 cargo jet flying from w: Guangzhou, China to Narita, Japan crashed while landing then burnt, killing two American pilots.
Revised: On Monday morning , a FedEx MD-11 cargo jet flying from Guangzhou, China to Narita, Japan crashed while landing then burnt, killing two American pilots.
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Original: On Monday morning , a FedEx  MD-11 cargo jet flying from w: Guangzhou, China to Narita, Japan crashed while landing then burnt, killing two American pilots.
Revised: On Monday morning , a FedEx MD-11 cargo jet flying from w: Guangzhou, China to 
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Original:  Fire fighters  were dispatched to the scene, and the two pilots  were taken to a local hospital , where they were pronounced dead.
Revised:  Fire fighters were dispatched to the scene, and the two pilots were taken to a local hospital where they were pronounced dead.
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Original:  Also the U.S. National Transportation Safety Board said it would deploy a team to Japan  .
Revised:  Also the U.S. National Transportation Safety Board said it is deploying a team to Japan .
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