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Original: The Telecommunications Commission of the Solomon Islands (TCSI) has issued a fine to a Papua New Guinea (PNG) mobile phone provider, for failing to meet the deadlines set out in the terms of its license. bemobile, the second provider of Mobile Service in the Solomon Islands, was supposed to have covered 50\% of the Solomons by September 2010 and 75\% by February 1st 2011.
Revised: The Telecommunications Commission of the Solomon Islands (TCSI) has issued a fine to a Papua New Guinea (PNG) mobile phone provider, for failing to meet the deadlines set out in the terms of its license. bemobile, the second mobile network service provider in the Solomon Islands, was supposed to have covered 50\% of the Solomons by September 2010 and 75\% by February 1st 2011.
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Original: This is now the second incidence of bemobile failing to meet its contractual obligations, and the Telecommunications Commissioner, Nicholas Williams, made it clear that they had fallen short of the target, despite being given time to sort the issue out :
Revised: This is the second time bemobile failed to meet its contractual obligations, and the Telecommunications Commissioner, Nicholas Williams, made it clear that they had fallen short of the target, despite being given time to sort the issue out :
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Original: This is now the second incidence of bemobile failing to meet its contractual obligations, and the Telecommunications Commissioner, Nicholas Williams, made it clear that they had fallen short of the target, despite being given time to sort the issue out :
Revised: This is now the second incidence of bemobile failing to meet its contractual obligations, and the Telecommunications Commissioner, Nicholas Williams, made it clear that they had fallen short of the target, despite being given time to sort the issue out .
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Original:   "TCSI has found that bemobile has failed to meet its third coverage threshold of 75\% of the population that commenced on 1 February 2011, as well as during the 14 day rectification period that was provided for under the licence  " Commissioner Williams also stated he could have raised the fine to U$2.5M, but he hoped that bemobile would use the extra capital to meet it's Q4 September deadline.
Revised:  Williams said, "TCSI has found that bemobile has failed to meet its third coverage threshold of 75\% of the population that commenced on 1 February 2011, as well as during the 14 day rectification period that was provided for under the licence " Commissioner Williams also stated he could have raised the fine to U$2.5M, but he hoped that bemobile would use the extra capital to meet it's Q4 September deadline.
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Original:   "TCSI has found that bemobile has failed to meet its third coverage threshold of 75\% of the population that commenced on 1 February 2011, as well as during the 14 day rectification period that was provided for under the licence  " Commissioner Williams also stated he could have raised the fine to U$2.5M, but he hoped that bemobile would use the extra capital to meet it's Q4 September deadline.
Revised:  "TCSI has found that bemobile has failed to meet its third coverage threshold of 75\% of the population that commenced on 1 February 2011, as well as during the 14-day rectification period that was provided for under the licence " Commissioner Williams also stated he could have raised the fine to U$2.5M, but he hoped that bemobile would use the extra capital to meet it's Q4 September deadline.
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Original:   "TCSI has found that bemobile has failed to meet its third coverage threshold of 75\% of the population that commenced on 1 February 2011, as well as during the 14 day rectification period that was provided for under the licence  " Commissioner Williams also stated he could have raised the fine to U$2.5M, but he hoped that bemobile would use the extra capital to meet it's Q4 September deadline.
Revised:  "TCSI has found that bemobile has failed to meet its third coverage threshold of 75\% of the population that commenced on 1 February 2011, as well as during the 14 day rectification period that was provided for under the licence . " Commissioner Williams also stated he could have raised the fine to U$2.5M, but he hoped that bemobile would use the extra capital to meet it's Q4 September deadline.
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Original:   "TCSI has found that bemobile has failed to meet its third coverage threshold of 75\% of the population that commenced on 1 February 2011, as well as during the 14 day rectification period that was provided for under the licence  " Commissioner Williams also stated he could have raised the fine to U$2.5M, but he hoped that bemobile would use the extra capital to meet it's Q4 September deadline.
Revised:  "TCSI has found that bemobile has failed to meet its third coverage threshold of 75\% of the population that commenced on 1 February 2011, as well as during the 14 day rectification period that was provided for under the licence " Commissioner Williams also stated he could have raised the fine to U$2.5M, but he hoped that bemobile would use the extra capital to meet its forth quarter September deadline.
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Original: The Telecommunications Commission of the Solomon Islands (TCSI) has issued a fine to a Papua New Guinea (PNG) mobile phone provider, for failing to meet the deadlines set out in the terms of its license. bemobile, the second mobile network service provider in the Solomon Islands, was supposed to have covered 50\% of the Solomons by September 2010 and 75\% by February 1st 2011.
Revised: The Telecommunications Commission of the Solomon Islands (TCSI) have issued a fine to a Papua New Guinea (PNG) mobile phone provider, for failing to meet the deadlines set out in the terms of its license. bemobile, the second mobile network service provider in the Solomon Islands, was supposed to have covered 50\% of the Solomons by September 2010 and 75\% by February 1st 2011.
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Original:   The device will be available in the United States on March 11, 2011, available in 16, 32, or 64 gigabytes. iPad 2's 3G model can connect to the wireless networks of both and and Wi-Fi.
Revised:  The device will become available in the United States on March 11, 2011, available in 16, 32, or 64 gigabytes. iPad 2's 3G model can connect to the wireless networks of both and and Wi-Fi.
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Original:  Competitors have designed tablets to compete with the iPad such as Motorola's XOOM  . One research analyst , predicted that iPads would still make up at least 20 million of the more than 24 million tablet computers sold in the United States in 2011.
Revised:  Competitors have designed tablets to compete with the iPad such as Motorola's XOOM . One research analyst predicted that iPads would still make up at least 20 million of the more than 24 million tablet computers sold in the United States in 2011.
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Original:  Another analyst credited the Apple's App store for iPad's continued success  The device will become available in the United States on March 11, 2011, available in 16, 32, or 64 gigabytes. iPad 2's 3G model can connect to the wireless networks of both and and Wi-Fi.
Revised:  Another analyst credited the Apple's App store for iPad's continued success . The device will become available in the United States on March 11, 2011, available in 16, 32, or 64 gigabytes. iPad 2's 3G model can connect to the wireless networks of both and and Wi-Fi.
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Original: iPad 1 (left) next to iPad 2 (right)  In a media event on March 2, Apple Inc. unveiled its tablet computer, the successor to the company's .
Revised: iPad 1 (left) next to iPad 2 (right) . In a media event on March 2, Apple Inc. unveiled its tablet computer, the successor to the company's .
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Original:  The new iPad introduces front and rear cameras and which enable FaceTime.
Revised:  The new iPad introduces front and rear cameras which enable FaceTime.
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Original:  Competitors have designed tablets to compete with the iPad such as Motorola's XOOM powered by the Android operating system.
Revised:  Competitors have designed tablets to compete with the iPad such as Motorola's Xoom powered by the Android operating system.
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Original:  The device will become available in the United States on March 11, 2011, available in 16, 32, or 64 gigabytes. iPad 2's 3G model can connect to the wireless networks of both and and Wi-Fi.
Revised:  The device will become available in the United States on March 11, 2011, available in 16, 32, or 64 gigabytes. iPad 2's 3G models can connect to the wireless networks of both and and Wi-Fi.
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Original:  The device will become available in the United States on March 11, 2011, available in 16, 32, or 64 gigabytes. iPad 2's 3G model can connect to the wireless networks of both and and Wi-Fi.
Revised:  The device will become available in the United States on March 11, 2011, available in 16, 32, or 64 gigabytes. iPad 2's 3G model can connect to the wireless networks of or and Wi-Fi.
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Original: Parks founded the Rosa and Raymond Parks Institute for Self Development and was politically active until long into her 80s.
Revised: Parks founded the Rosa and Raymond Parks Institute for Self Development and was politically active until well into her 80s.
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Original:  She received the two higest civilian awards in the U.S.;
Revised:  She received the two highest civilian awards in the U.S.;
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Original: Parks was best known for her refusal to yield her seat to a white man who demanded her seat on a city bus.
Revised: Parks was best known for her refusal to yield her seat to a white man who demanded it on a city bus.
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Original:  She later worked on the Staff of U.S. Rep. John Conyers (D-MI) who called her "a real apostle of the nonviolence movement" in an interview with CNN.
Revised:  She later worked on the Staff of U.S. Representative John Conyers (D-MI) who called her "a real apostle of the nonviolence movement" in an interview with CNN.
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Original: Image:RosaParks-BillClinton.jpg|Parks with former U.S. President Bill Clinton Rosa Parks, the African American woman who served as a catalyst to the American Civil Rights Movement, died of natural causes on Monday night at her home in Detroit, Michigan.
Revised:  Rosa Parks, the African American woman who served as a catalyst to the American Civil Rights Movement, died of natural causes on Monday night at her home in Detroit, Michigan.
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Original:  She later worked on the Staff of U.S. Representative John Conyers (D-MI) who called her "a real apostle of the nonviolence movement" in an interview with CNN.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Parks founded the Rosa and Raymond Parks Institute for Self Development and was politically active until well into her 80s.
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Original:  She later worked on the Staff of U.S. Representative John Conyers (D-MI) who called her "a real apostle of the nonviolence movement" in an interview with CNN.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Parks founded the Rosa and Raymond Parks Institute for Self Development and was politically active until well into her 80s.
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Original: As UNICEF launches a global campaign to help the youngest victims of HIV/AIDS, the charity has warned that 18 million children may be orphaned by the disease by 2010.
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Original:  They say that every minute, a child dies from an AIDS-related disease, a child becomes infected with HIV, and four people in age group 15-24 become infected with the disease.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The UNICEF advisor in Nairobi, Naisiadet Mason, told Reuters: "The day I was told I was HIV positive I was devastated and alone.
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Original:  The 2.6 kernel, deemed the first enterprise-level release of the software, became available for users in 2004 and made significant inroads into the enterprise-computing industry.
Revised:  The 2.6 kernel, deemed the first enterprise-level release of the software, became available for users in 2004 and made significant inroads into the enterprise computing industry.
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Original: December 30, 2004 According to Google's 2004 Year-End Google Zeitgeist  , Linux scored fifth in a list of most-searched technology terms, beating out all other operating systems.
Revised:  According to Google's 2004 Year-End Google Zeitgeist , Linux scored fifth in a list of most-searched technology terms, beating out all other operating systems.
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Original: December 30, 2004 According to Google's 2004 Year-End Google Zeitgeist  , Linux scored fifth in a list of most-searched technology terms, beating out all other operating systems.
Revised: December 30, 2004 According to Google's 2004 Year-End Google Zeitgeist report , Linux scored fifth in a list of most-searched technology terms, beating out all other operating systems.
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Original: December 30, 2004 According to Google's 2004 Year-End Google Zeitgeist  , Linux scored fifth in a list of most-searched technology terms, beating out all other operating systems.
Revised: December 30, 2004 According to Google's 2004 Year-End Google Zeitgeist , Linux scored fifth on a list of most-searched technology terms, beating out all other operating systems.
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Original:  The IDC recently reported a prediction that the overall market revenue for Linux will exceed $35 billion by 2008.
Revised:  The IDC recently reported a prediction that the worldwide market revenue for Linux will exceed $35 billion by 2008.
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Original:   A lawsuit by SCO against IBM for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year . 'SCO' was the number one company query for 2004 in Google's report.
Revised:  "SCO" was the number one company query for 2004 in Google's report. A lawsuit by SCO against IBM for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year . 'SCO' was the number one company query for 2004 in Google's report.
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Original:   A lawsuit by SCO against IBM for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year . 'SCO' was the number one company query for 2004 in Google's report.
Revised:  A lawsuit by SCO against IBM for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year 'SCO' was the number one company query for 2004 in Google's report.
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Original:   A lawsuit by SCO against IBM for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year . 'SCO' was the number one company query for 2004 in Google's report.
Revised:  A lawsuit by SCO against IBM for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year . 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 'Linux' was the number 4 technology search term on Google in 2002
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Original:  Linux was the number 4 technology search term on Google in 2002.
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Original: "SCO" was the number one company query for 2004 in Google's report.
Revised: "SCO" was the No. 1 company query for 2004 in Google's report.
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Original:  A lawsuit by SCO against IBM  for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year
Revised:  High-profile lawsuits by SCO against IBM for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year
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Original:  A lawsuit by SCO against IBM  for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year
Revised:  A lawsuit by SCO against IBM for alleged copyright or patent infringement were filed and dominated Linux news through the year
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Original:  A lawsuit by SCO against IBM  for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news through the year
Revised:  A lawsuit by SCO against IBM for alleged copyright or patent infringement was filed and dominated Linux news throughout the year
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Electoral Commission official Farid Ayar called the vote "100\% correct" and said that there were "no cases of fraud that could affect the results of the vote".
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Original:  But the Sunni official Saleh al-Mutlaq said the referendum was a "farce" and accused the government of stealing ballot boxes in areas where most people voted "No".%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Observers from the United Nations dispute that statement.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Parlimentary elections are now scheduled for December 15, 2005.
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Original: Flag of Iraq Iraqi voters have accepted the draft constitution, the Independent Electoral Commission announced Tuesday.
Revised:  Iraqi voters have accepted the draft constitution, the Independent Electoral Commission announced Tuesday.
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Original: cave explorer has made the decision to resign from his position as of Egypt.
Revised:  has made the decision to resign from his position as of Egypt.
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Original:  , another pro-democracy activist and co-recipient of the Nobel Peace Prize , tweeted on Twitter that Egypt is "on the right track."
Revised:  , another pro-democracy activist and co-recipient of the , tweeted on Twitter that Egypt is "on the right track."
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Original:  , which currently controls the country, made the announcement in a statement released on Thursday.
Revised:  , which currently controls the country, announced on Thursday.
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Original:  Shafik was appointed to his position by  Hosni Mubarak during the 2011 Egypt anti-government protests, not long before Mubarak made the decision to resign as Egyptian president on February 11, 2011.
Revised:  Shafik was appointed to his position by Hosni Mubarak during the 2011 Egypt anti-government protests, not long before Mubarak decided to resign as Egyptian president on February 11, 2011.
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Original:  Shafik was appointed to his position by  Hosni Mubarak during the 2011 Egypt anti-government protests, not long before Mubarak made the decision to resign as Egyptian president on February 11, 2011.
Revised:  Shafik was appointed to his position by Hosni Mubarak during the 2011 Egypt anti-government protests, not long before Mubarak made the decision to resign as president on February 11, 2011.
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Original:  Meanwhile, a number of his cabinet ministers  retained their positions.
Revised:  Meanwhile, a number of his cabinet ministers have retained their positions.
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Original:  Shafik had received criticism for his negative attitude towards protesters of low ages and his insufficient aims , according to the .
Revised:  Shafik had received criticism for his negative attitude towards young protesters and his "inadequate vision" , according to the .
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Original:  In response to the announcement of Shafik's resignation, , a executive accredited for organizing the first demonstration and  former political prisoner, wrote on Twitter, a micro-blogging website, "Power to the people!"
Revised:  In response to the announcement of Shafik's resignation, , a executive , credited with organizing the first demonstration and former political prisoner, wrote on Twitter, a micro-blogging website, "Power to the people!"
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Original:  In response to the announcement of Shafik's resignation, , a executive accredited for organizing the first demonstration and  former political prisoner, wrote on Twitter, a micro-blogging website, "Power to the people!"
Revised:  In response to the announcement of Shafik's resignation, , a executive accredited for organizing the first demonstration and a former political prisoner, wrote on Twitter, a micro-blogging website, "Power to the people!"
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Original:  During the Egyptian protests, one of the key demands of the protesters was for Shafik to step down from as acting minister status.
Revised:  During the Egyptian protests, one of the key demands of the protesters was that Shafik step down from as acting minister status.
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Original:  During the Egyptian protests, one of the key demands of the protesters was for Shafik to step down from as acting minister status.
Revised:  During the Egyptian protests, one of the key demands of the protesters was for Shafik to step down from his acting minister status.
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Original:  The statement released from the Council also announced  the new prime minister will be . "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces decided to accept the resignation of Prime Minister Ahmed Shafiq and appointed Essam Sharaf to form the new government," the armed forces have said on social networking website Facebook.
Revised:  The statement released by the Council also announced the new prime minister will be . "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces decided to accept the resignation of Prime Minister Ahmed Shafiq and appointed Essam Sharaf to form the new government," the armed forces have said on social networking website Facebook.
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Original:  The statement released from the Council also announced  the new prime minister will be . "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces decided to accept the resignation of Prime Minister Ahmed Shafiq and appointed Essam Sharaf to form the new government," the armed forces have said on social networking website Facebook.
Revised:  The statement released from the Council also announced as the new prime minister will be . "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces decided to accept the resignation of Prime Minister Ahmed Shafiq and appointed Essam Sharaf to form the new government," the armed forces have said on social networking website Facebook.
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Original:  The statement released from the Council also announced  the new prime minister will be . "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces decided to accept the resignation of Prime Minister Ahmed Shafiq and appointed Essam Sharaf to form the new government," the armed forces have said on social networking website Facebook.
Revised:  The statement released from the Council also announced the new prime minister . "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces decided to accept the resignation of Prime Minister Ahmed Shafiq and appointed Essam Sharaf to form the new government," the armed forces have said on social networking website Facebook.
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Original:  The statement released from the Council also announced  the new prime minister will be . "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces decided to accept the resignation of Prime Minister Ahmed Shafiq and appointed Essam Sharaf to form the new government," the armed forces have said on social networking website Facebook.
Revised:  The statement released from the Council also announced the new prime minister will be . "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces decided to accept the resignation of Prime Minister Ahmed Shafiq and appointed Essam Sharaf to form the new government," the armed forces said on social networking website Facebook.
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