wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  According to close sources, Lieberman refused to attend over President Lula's refusal to visit and a lay a wreath on the grave of Zionist movement founder Theodor Herzl.
Revised:  According to close sources, Lieberman refused to attend over President Lula's refusal to visit and to lay a wreath on the grave of Zionist movement founder Theodor Herzl.
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Original:  A senior Nigerian diplomat responded to Gaddafi’s comments saying that he “ did not take the suggestion seriously ” .
Revised:  A senior Nigerian diplomat responded to Gaddafi’s comments saying that he " did not take the suggestion seriously ” .
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Original:  A senior Nigerian diplomat responded to Gaddafi’s comments saying that he “ did not take the suggestion seriously ” .
Revised:  A senior Nigerian diplomat responded to Gaddafi’s comments saying that he “ did not take the suggestion seriously " .
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Original:  He called the divide of India "historic, radical solution" which saved the lives of "millions of Hindus and Muslims" despite reports that one million people were killed.
Revised:  He called the division of India a "historic, radical solution" which saved the lives of "millions of Hindus and Muslims" despite reports that one million people were killed.
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Original:  He also called the recent violence in Jos a "deep conflict of religious nature" and put the blame on the British stating that  federal state was imposed by Britain.
Revised:  He also called the recent violence in Jos a "deep conflict of religious nature" and put the blame on the British stating that the federal state was imposed by Britain.
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Original:  Around 100 people have died already this year of violence near the capital city of Jos.
Revised:  Around 100 people have died already this year in violence near the capital city of Jos.
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Original:  He was quoted  saying that the spilt "would stop the bloodshed and burning of places of worship ". During his speech to students, Gaddafi spoke about the partition in India  and Pakistan.
Revised:  He was quoted as saying that the spilt "would stop the bloodshed and burning of places of worship ". During his speech to students, Gaddafi spoke about the partition in India and Pakistan.
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Original:  He was quoted  saying that the spilt "would stop the bloodshed and burning of places of worship ". During his speech to students, Gaddafi spoke about the partition in India  and Pakistan.
Revised:  He was quoted saying that the spilt "would stop the bloodshed and burning of places of worship ." During his speech to students, Gaddafi spoke about the partition in India and Pakistan.
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Original:  He called the division of India a "historic, radical solution" which saved the lives of "millions of Hindus and Muslims  " despite reports that one million people were killed.
Revised:  He called the division of India a "historic, radical solution" which saved the lives of "millions of Hindus and Muslims , " despite reports that one million people were killed.
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Original:  He also called the recent violence in Jos a "deep conflict of religious nature " and put the blame on the British stating that the federal state was imposed by Britain.
Revised:  He also called the recent violence in Jos a "deep conflict of a religious nature, " and put the blame on the British stating that the federal state was imposed by Britain.
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Original:  A senior Nigerian diplomat responded to Gaddafi ’ s comments saying that he "did not take the suggestion seriously ".
Revised:  A senior Nigerian diplomat responded to Gaddafi ' s comments saying that he "did not take the suggestion seriously ".
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Original:  A senior Nigerian diplomat responded to Gaddafi ’ s comments saying that he "did not take the suggestion seriously ".
Revised:  A senior Nigerian diplomat responded to Gaddafi ’ s comments saying that he "did not take the suggestion seriously ."
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Original: During his speech to students, Gaddafi spoke about the partition in India into the Republic of Indiaand Pakistan .
Revised: During his speech to students, Gaddafi spoke about the partition of India .
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Original:  He called the that two-state division a "historic, radical solution" which saved the lives of "millions of Hindus and Muslims," despite reports that one million people were killed.
Revised:  He called the that division a "historic, radical solution" which saved the lives of "millions of Hindus and Muslims," despite reports that one million people were killed.
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Original: Around 100 people have died already this year in violence near the capital city of Jos.
Revised: Around 100 people have died already this year in violence near the city of Jos.
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Original:  A navigation chart showed the pinnacle, but Drysdale said  he had misread its depth as 732 metres.
Revised:  A navigation chart showed the pinnacle, but Drysdale said that he had misread its depth as 732 metres.
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Original:  The Royal Navy has since brought in new procedures  .
Revised:  The Royal Navy has since brought in new procedures to prevent a repeat .
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Original:  The £32 million submarine was on its way to the Persian Gulf, when officers decided to dive deeper in order to travel faster and reach their destination on time         
Revised:  The £32 million submarine was on its way to the Persian Gulf, when officers decided to dive deeper in order to travel faster and reach their destination on time . 
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Original:  The Royal Navy has since brought in new procedures to prevent a repeat.
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Original:  The failings were unacceptable and we take an extremely dim view of them.  
Revised:  The failings were unacceptable and we take an extremely dim view of them. " 
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Original:  Separately, the proposal would include some changes in regulation over Internet lines, which is largely opposed by the industry, as well as plans to introduce a new fee for use of the airwaves, which are currently untaxed
Revised:  Separately, the proposal would include some changes to regulations over Internet lines, which is largely opposed by the industry, as well as plans to introduce a new fee for use of the airwaves, which are currently untaxed
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Original:  Separately, the proposal would include some changes in regulation over Internet lines, which is largely opposed by the industry, as well as plans to introduce a new fee for use of the airwaves, which are currently untaxed
Revised:  Separately, the proposal would include some changes in regulation over Internet lines, which are largely opposed by the industry, as well as plans to introduce a new fee for use of the airwaves, which are currently untaxed
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Original:  "They will not move us from here", said Elena, mostly known as Fonola  
Revised:  "They will not move us from here", said Elena, mostly known as Fonola . 
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Original:  La Cruz Hill, Pichilemu, Chile — After this Thursday 6.9 earthquake with epicentre in the coastal town of Pichilemu, Chile, people went to La Cruz Hill, the safest place in the town, with an elevation of almost 100 meters (328 ft).
Revised:  La Cruz Hill, Pichilemu, Chile — After last Thursday's 6.9 earthquake with epicentre in the coastal town of Pichilemu, Chile, people went to La Cruz Hill, the safest place in the town, with an elevation of almost 100 meters (328 ft).
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Original:  Last night the police, army, the province gobernor , and militaries went to the hill to inform the people that they had to leave the hill because of hygiene.
Revised:  Last night the police, army, the province governor , and militaries went to the hill to inform the people that they had to leave the hill because of hygiene.
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Original: (no jobs) La Cruz Hill was named after the cross pictured.
Revised:  La Cruz Hill was named after the cross pictured.
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Original: Police have briefly cordoned off a tube station in East London on Saturday morning, the BBC reports.
Revised: Police briefly cordoned off a tube station in East London on Saturday morning, the BBC reports.
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Original: Police briefly cordoned off Mile-End tube station in East London on Saturday morning , the BBC reports .
Revised: Police briefly cordoned off Mile-End tube station in East London on Saturday morning .
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Original:  Democrats on Saturday turned over their radio broadcast to a former CIA agent Larry Johnson, a Republican , who accused President Bush of flip-flopping on his pledge to fire anybody on his staff involved with the leak.
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Original:  Johnson, a participant in the Friday hearing , said " We deserve people who work in the White House who are committed to protecting classified information, telling the truth to the American people, and living by example to the idea that a country at war with Islamic extremists cannot focus its efforts on attacking other American citizens who simply tried to tell the truth."
Revised:  Johnson, a participant in the Friday hearing , said " A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability.”
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Original:  Central to his bid would be to bring articles of impeachment against George W. Bush  
Revised:  Central to his bid would be to bring articles of impeachment against George W. Bush . 
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Original:   The hearing was not an official proceeding of the Congress.
Revised:  The hearing was not an official proceeding of Congress.
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Original:  Rep. Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability.”
Revised:  Representative Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability.”
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Original: United States Capitol building Democrats on Saturday turned over their radio broadcast to a former CIA agent  Larry Johnson, a Republican, who accused President Bush of flip-flopping on his pledge to fire anybody on his staff involved with the  leak.
Revised: United States Capitol building Democrats on Saturday turned over their radio broadcast to a former CIA agent Larry Johnson, who accused President Bush of flip-flopping on his pledge to fire anybody on his staff involved with the leak.
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Original:  House and Senate Democrats held a highly partisan hearing Friday where four retired U.S. intelligence officials aired views that were critical of the Valerie Plame leak itself, and then critical of Bush administration and Republican efforts to minimize damage caused by the controversy.
Revised:  House and Senate Democrats held a highly partisan hearing Friday where four retired U.S. intelligence officials aired views that were critical of the Plame leak itself, and then critical of Bush administration and Republican efforts to minimize damage caused by the controversy.
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Original:  Democratic lawmakers organized it after the Republican leaders of congressional committees with jurisdiction  these matters rejected their request for legislative oversight hearings . Representative Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability.”
Revised:  Democratic lawmakers organized it after Republican leaders in congressional committees with jurisdiction these matters rejected their request for legislative oversight hearings . Representative Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability.”
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Original:  Democratic lawmakers organized it after the Republican leaders of congressional committees with jurisdiction  these matters rejected their request for legislative oversight hearings . Representative Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability.”
Revised:  Democratic lawmakers organized it after the Republican leaders of congressional committees with jurisdiction in these matters rejected their request for legislative oversight hearings . Representative Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability.”
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Original:  Democratic lawmakers organized it after the Republican leaders of congressional committees with jurisdiction  these matters rejected their request for legislative oversight hearings . Representative Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability.”
Revised:  Democratic lawmakers organized it after the Republican leaders of congressional committees with jurisdiction these matters rejected their request for a legislative oversight hearing . Representative Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability.”
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Original:  Meanwhile, a Vermont native Dennis Morrisseau, 62, plans to run as a Republican for the United States House of Representatives to fill a seat that will be vacated by Bernard Sanders (I-Vt)  . Central to his bid would be to bring articles of impeachment against George W. Bush.
Revised:  Meanwhile, a Vermont native Dennis Morrisseau, 62, plans a Republican run for a soon to be vacated seat in the House of Representatives to fill a seat that will be vacated by Bernard Sanders (I-Vt) . Central to his bid would be to bring articles of impeachment against George W. Bush.
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Original:  Meanwhile, a Vermont native Dennis Morrisseau, 62, plans to run as a Republican for the United States House of Representatives to fill a seat that will be vacated by Bernard Sanders (I-Vt)  . Central to his bid would be to bring articles of impeachment against George W. Bush.
Revised:  Meanwhile, a Vermont native Dennis Morrisseau, 62, plans to run as a Republican for the United States House of Representatives . Bernard Sanders (I-Vt) . Central to his bid would be to bring articles of impeachment against George W. Bush.
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Original:  Meanwhile, a Vermont native Dennis Morrisseau, 62, plans to run as a Republican for the United States House of Representatives to fill a seat that will be vacated by Bernard Sanders (I-Vt)  . Central to his bid would be to bring articles of impeachment against George W. Bush.
Revised:  Meanwhile, a Vermont native Dennis Morrisseau, 62, plans to run as a Republican for the United States House of Representatives to fill a seat that will be vacated by Bernard Sanders (I-Vt) . Central to Morrisseau's bid is his pledge to bring articles of impeachment against George W. Bush.
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Original:  Representative Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability. ”
Revised:  Representative Henry Waxman (D-CA), the ranking minority member of the House Committee on Government Reform, said "A special standard seems to apply to Karl Rove: There will be no questions asked, and no accountability. "
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Original:  For this reason, and given the situation, the club has decided to cancel the team's tour of England.   
Revised:  For this reason, and given the situation, the club has decided to cancel the team's tour of England. " 
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Original: Scotland Yard issued a statement that  Jean Charles de Menezes, the 27-year-old Brazilian electrician shot to death yesterday by police in a London Underground station was "not connected" to Thursday's bombings and called the incident "a tragedy".
Revised: Scotland Yard issued a statement that w: Jean Charles de Menezes, the 27-year-old Brazilian electrician shot to death yesterday by police in a London Underground station was "not connected" to Thursday's bombings and called the incident "a tragedy".
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Original: Scotland Yard issued a statement that w: Jean Charles de Menezes, the 27-year-old Brazilian electrician shot to death yesterday by police in a London Underground station was "not connected" to Thursday's bombings and called the incident "a tragedy".
Revised: Scotland Yard issued a statement that Jean Charles de Menezes, the 27-year-old Brazilian electrician shot to death yesterday by police in a London Underground station was "not connected" to Thursday's bombings and called the incident "a tragedy".
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Original: Appology, but There Could Be More Shootings Metropolitan Police chief Sir Ian Blair has apologised to the family of Jean Charles de Menezes, describing the death as a "tragedy".
Revised:  Metropolitan Police chief Sir Ian Blair has apologised to the family of Jean Charles de Menezes, describing the death as a "tragedy".
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Original:  Home Secretary Charles Clarke described the shooting of Mr Menezes as an "absolute tragedy" before going on to say "I hope [the family] understand the police were trying to do their very best under very difficult circumstances." Brazilian Government Reaction
Revised:  Home Secretary Charles Clarke described the shooting of Mr Menezes as an "absolute tragedy" before going on to say "I hope [the family] understand the police were trying to do their very best under very difficult circumstances." Brazilian government reaction
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Original:  Beta testing of Windows Vista targeted at developers and IT professionals, will begin on August 3 
Revised:  Beta testing of Windows Vista targeted at developers and IT professionals, will begin on August 3. 
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Original: Microsoft Corp. has announced that the official name of the next version of its Windows operating system will be named "Windows Vista".
Revised: Microsoft Corporation has announced that the official name of the next version of its Windows operating system will be named "Windows Vista".
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Original: Microsoft Corp. has announced that the official name of the next version of its Windows operating system will be named "Windows Vista".
Revised: Microsoft Corp. has announced that the official name of the next version of its Windows operating system will be "Windows Vista".
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Original:  Windows Vista was formerly code-named “Longhorn.” Brian Valentine and Kevin Johnson announce Windows Vista at the Microsoft Global Business Conference in Atlanta Brad Goldberg, the general manager of Windows product development, said the new name is aimed at "communicating the idea of clarity."
Revised:  The system was formerly referred to by the codename “Longhorn.” Brian Valentine and Kevin Johnson announce Windows Vista at the Microsoft Global Business Conference in Atlanta Brad Goldberg, the general manager of Windows product development, said the new name is aimed at "communicating the idea of clarity."
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Original:  Microsoft has said that this new version will included better graphics , and security.
Revised:  Microsoft has said that this new version will include better graphics and security.
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Original:  Beta testing of Windows Vista targeted at developers and IT professionals , will begin on August 3.
Revised:  Beta testing of the software targeted at developers and IT professionals , will begin on August 3.
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Original:  Beta testing of Windows Vista targeted at developers and IT professionals , will begin on August 3.
Revised:  Beta testing of Windows Vista targeted at developers and IT professionals will begin on August 3.
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Original:  ]] Mario Pardo, a geophysist at the University of Chile, has ruled out that a "seismic swarm" does not exists in the coastal town of Pichilemu, about 259 kilometers from Santiago.
Revised:  ]] Mario Pardo, a geophysist at the University of Chile, has ruled out that a "seismic swarm" exists in the coastal town of Pichilemu, about 259 kilometers from Santiago.
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Original:  They are not more than  technicality: a seismic swarm doesn't correspond to an aftershock sequence that will last in some time", he explained.
Revised:  They are not more than a technicality: a seismic swarm doesn't correspond to an aftershock sequence that will last in some time", he explained.
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Original:  The seismologist, in an interview with Cooperativa Radio, explained that the situation in Pichilemu occurs generally in areas where  " it can't be differenced a main seism, where they have very similar magnitudes, and when they take some time to disappear".
Revised:  The seismologist, in an interview with Cooperativa Radio, explained that the situation in Pichilemu occurs generally in areas where " can't be differenced a main seism, where they have very similar magnitudes, and when they take some time to disappear".
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Original:  The seismologist, in an interview with Cooperativa Radio, explained that the situation in Pichilemu occurs generally in areas where  " it can't be differenced a main seism, where they have very similar magnitudes, and when they take some time to disappear".
Revised:  The seismologist, in an interview with Cooperativa Radio, explained that the situation in Pichilemu occurs generally in areas where " it can't be differentiated from a main seism, where they have very similar magnitudes, and when they take some time to disappear".
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Original: Adobe houses and historic buildings were the most damaged in the region: in fact, Monsignor Alejandro Goic, said that only 2 of the 66 churches in the region were not damaged.
Revised: Adobe houses and historic buildings sustained the most damaged in the region: in fact, Monsignor Alejandro Goic, said that only 2 of the 66 churches in the region were not damaged.
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Original:  ]] Mario Pardo, a geophysist at the University of Chile, has ruled out that a "seismic swarm" exists in the coastal town of Pichilemu, about 259 kilometers from Santiago.
Revised:  ]] Mario Pardo, a geophysicist at the University of Chile, has ruled out that a "seismic swarm" exists in the coastal town of Pichilemu, about 259 kilometers from Santiago.
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Original:  Pakistani officials say that the latter area is controlled by Taleban commander Hatiz Gul Bahadur  
Revised:  Pakistani officials say that the latter area is controlled by Taleban commander Hatiz Gul Bahadur . 
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Original:  According to the BBC, the US has increased drone strikes recently, and that since August 2008, such attacks have killed several hundred people  
Revised:  According to the BBC, the US has increased drone strikes recently, and that since August 2008, such attacks have killed several hundred people . 
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Original:  conflicting media reports say that the first one consisted of either four or five missiles launched from an unmanned aerial vehicle.
Revised:  conflicting media reports say that the first strike consisted of either four or five missiles launched from an unmanned aerial vehicle.
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Original:  They hit a vehicle and a  compound in the town of Hamzoni, located close to Miranshah, killing three people.
Revised:  They hit a vehicle and a compound in the town of Hamzoni, killing three people.
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