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Original:  They will also be the first ever National Lottery winners to go into a list called "The Sunday Times Rich List", which is a compilation of some of the richest people in the United Kingdom that is featured every Sunday in a British broadsheet newspaper called The Sunday Times.
Revised:  They will also be the first ever National Lottery winners to go into a list called "The Sunday Times Rich List", which is a compilation of some of the richest people in the United Kingdom that is featured every Sunday in a British broadsheet newspaper , The Sunday Times.
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Original:  No casualties were reported  
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Original: File photo of General Casey The United States' army's chief of staff, General George Casey , said today that he believes more troops are needed in Afghanistan.
Revised: File photo of General Casey The United States' army's chief of staff, General , said today that he believes more troops are needed in Afghanistan.
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Original:  In a US television interview with NBC's "Meet the Press" programme, Casey said he believed additional forces are needed to cut the Taliban's successes and train Afghan security forces.
Revised:  In a US television interview with NBC's programme, Casey said he believed additional forces are needed to cut the Taliban's successes and train Afghan security forces.
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Original:  In CNN's State of the Union programme, Casey remarked that "[t]he Army remains out of balance.
Revised:  In CNN's programme, Casey remarked that "[t]he Army remains out of balance.
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Original:  President Barack Obama has been deliberating for weeks whether to deploy 40,000 more troops to Afghanistan, as requested by General Stanley McChrystal , the commander of US and NATO forces there
Revised:  President Barack Obama has been deliberating for weeks whether to deploy 40,000 more troops to Afghanistan, as requested by General , the commander of US and NATO forces there
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Original:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section  155 kilometres long (96 miles long)  remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
Revised:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section of the 155 kilometres long (96 miles long) remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
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Original:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section  155 kilometres long (96 miles long)  remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
Revised:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section 155 kilometres long (96 miles long) wall remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
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Original:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section of the 155 kilometres long (96 miles long) wall remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
Revised:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section of the 155 kilometres (96 miles long) wall remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
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Original:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section of the 155 kilometres long (96 miles long) wall remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
Revised:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section of the 155 kilometres long (96 miles ) long wall remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
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Original:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section of the 155 kilometres (96 miles ) long wall remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
Revised:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section of the 155 kilometre (96 miles ) long wall remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
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Original:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section of the 155 kilometres (96 miles ) long wall remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
Revised:  Much of the Wall has since been demolished, although a section of the 155 kilometres (96 mile ) long wall remains serving as an art gallery for graffiti artists.
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Original:  Efforts have been made to improve the ventilation   .
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Original:  The managing director of Transport for London, Peter O'Toole , described the decision to evacuate as being "very grave, not taken lightly".
Revised:  O'Toole , described the decision to evacuate as being "very grave, not taken lightly".
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Original:  The managing director of Transport for London, Peter O'Toole , described the decision to evacuate as being "very grave, not taken lightly".
Revised:  The managing director of Transport for London, Peter O'Toole described the decision to evacuate as being "very grave, not taken lightly".
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Original:  When questioned as to whether everything possible had been done on the day to save lives, O'Toole said he was "very proud" of the choices made that morning.
Revised:  When questioned as to whether everything possible had been done on the day to save lives, the managing director of Transport for London was "very proud" of the choices made that morning.
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Original:  The first call the police recieved that morning reported "a bang" at Aldgate East, coming within a minute of the blast.
Revised:  The first call the police received that morning reported "a bang" at Aldgate East, coming within a minute of the blast.
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Original: Data from the Underground system's power and control systems have revealed that all three bombs went off within 50 seconds of each other, at 8.50am, with the managing director of Transport for London, Tim O'Toole saying the bombs went ' bang bang bang, very close together ' . The first bomb to detonate was on the Aldgate train , seconds before the others.
Revised: Data from the Underground system's power and control systems have revealed that all three bombs went off within 50 seconds of each other, at 8.50am, with the managing director of Transport for London, Tim O'Toole saying the bombs went " bang bang bang, very close together ' . The first bomb to detonate was on the Aldgate train , seconds before the others.
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Original: Data from the Underground system's power and control systems have revealed that all three bombs went off within 50 seconds of each other, at 8.50am, with the managing director of Transport for London, Tim O'Toole saying the bombs went ' bang bang bang, very close together ' . The first bomb to detonate was on the Aldgate train , seconds before the others.
Revised: Data from the Underground system's power and control systems have revealed that all three bombs went off within 50 seconds of each other, at 8.50am, with the managing director of Transport for London, Tim O'Toole saying the bombs went ' bang bang bang, very close together " . The first bomb to detonate was on the Aldgate train , seconds before the others.
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Original:  The Piccadilly line bomb cut the tunnel telephone system wires , which then tripped out the track current.
Revised:  The Piccadilly line bomb was when the tunnel telephone system wires , which then tripped out the track current.
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Original: Currently, work is on-going to retrieve bodies and forensic evidence from the carriage of the train in the deep tunnel of the Piccadilly line near Kings 's Cross.
Revised: Currently, work is on-going to retrieve bodies and forensic evidence from the carriage of the train in the deep tunnel of the Piccadilly line near King 's Cross.
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Original:  Our police are rendering their lives to save citizens but these kinds of incidents are hard to stop.  
Revised:  Our police are rendering their lives to save citizens but these kinds of incidents are hard to stop. " 
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Original: Local government official Sahibzada Anis said that "despite all the security arrangements  you cannot stop one who is bent upon killing himself and others.
Revised: Local government official Sahibzada Anis said that "despite all the security arrangements , you cannot stop one who is bent upon killing himself and others.
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Original: Local government official Sahibzada Anis said that "despite all the security arrangements , you cannot stop one who is bent upon killing himself and others.
Revised: Local government official Sahibzada Anis said that "despite all the security arrangements you cannot stop one who is bent upon killing himself and others.
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Original:  Twelve people have been sentenced to death  
Revised:  Twelve people have been sentenced to death . 
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Original:  The official Xinhua news agency reported that the nine were the first of those convicted in the riots to be executed.
Revised:  The official Xinhau news agency reported that the nine were the first of those convicted in the riots to be executed.
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Original: According to the statement, the cause of the incident is under investigation, although there was no immediate indication that the crash could have been caused  an enemy attack.
Revised: According to the statement, the cause of the incident is under investigation, although there was no immediate indication that the crash could have been caused by an enemy attack.
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Original:  , the , is to announce plans today for a proposed high-speed rail link between a number of cities in the North of England as a means to bring about economic development and build a "northern powerhouse" to compete with .
Revised:  , the , is to announce plans today for a proposed high-speed rail link between a number of cities in the North of as a means to bring about economic development and build a "northern powerhouse" to compete with .
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Original:  Osborne believes that the individual cities in the north of England are strong, but "collectively not strong enough" and the "whole is less than the sum of its parts".
Revised:  Osborne says the individual cities in the north of England are strong, but "collectively not strong enough" and the "whole is less than the sum of its parts".
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Original:  To remedy this, Osborne is proposing that plans are made to create high-speed railways between , and , the latter to link up with , the planned high-speed railway to run between London and Birmingham.
Revised:  To remedy this, Osborne is proposing plans be made to create high-speed railways between , and , the latter to link up with , the planned high-speed railway to run between London and Birmingham.
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Original:  "We need an ambitious plan to make the cities and towns here in this northern belt radically more connected from east to west - to create the equivalent of travelling around a single global city.
Revised:  "We need an ambitious plan to make the cities and towns here in this northern belt radically more connected from east to west — to create the equivalent of travelling around a single global city.
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Original:  The shadow chancellor,  said: "We said months ago that we need value for money for the taxpayer and to improve the existing plans to maximise the benefits for the whole country and strengthen the links between northern cities.
Revised:  The shadow chancellor, , said: "We said months ago that we need value for money for the taxpayer and to improve the existing plans to maximise the benefits for the whole country and strengthen the links between northern cities.
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Original:  Nobody will believe the Tories can deliver the jobs, growth and investment we need for the north of England.
Revised:  Nobody will believe the can deliver the jobs, growth and investment we need for the north of England.
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Original:  To remedy this, Osborne is proposing plans be made to create high-speed railways between , and , the latter to link up with , the planned high-speed railway to run between London and Birmingham.
Revised:  To remedy this, he is proposing plans be made to create high-speed railways between , and , the latter to link up with , the planned high-speed railway to run between London and Birmingham.
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Original:   Nobody will believe the can deliver the jobs, growth and investment we need for the north of England.
Revised:  ... Nobody will believe the can deliver the jobs, growth and investment we need for the north of England.
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Original: Osborne says the individual cities in the north of England are strong, but "collectively not strong enough" and the "whole is less than the sum of its parts" .
Revised: Osborne says the individual cities in the north of England are strong, but "collectively not strong enough" .
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Original:  To remedy this, he is proposing plans be made to create high-speed railways between , and , the latter to link up with , the planned high-speed railway to run between London and Birmingham.
Revised:  To remedy this, he is proposing plans be made to create high-speed railways between , and , the latter to link up with a planned high-speed railway to run between London and Birmingham.
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Original:  To remedy this, he is proposing plans be made to create high-speed railways between , and , the latter to link up with a planned high-speed railway to run between London and Birmingham.
Revised:  To remedy this, he is proposing plans be made to create high-speed railways between , and , the latter to link up with , the planned high-speed railway to run between London and Birmingham.
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Original:  Then he had sex with her   
Revised:  Then he had sex with her . 
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Original:  However, upon questioning he admitted the killings  
Revised:  However, upon questioning he admitted the killings . 
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Original: By Spetember 28 Lowry had been reported missing and police questioned her killer on October 5, 2008 during routine enquiries.
Revised: By September 28 Lowry had been reported missing and police questioned her killer on October 5, 2008 during routine enquiries.
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Original: 150px A Nobel Prize winner, prominent Russian Academician of the Russian Academy of Sciences and theoretical physicist Vitaly Ginzburg has died on Sunday at the age of 93 years.
Revised:  A Nobel Prize winner, prominent Russian Academician of the Russian Academy of Sciences and theoretical physicist Vitaly Ginzburg has died on Sunday at the age of 93 years.
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Original:   Ginzburg was one of the fathers of Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN), editor-in-chief of the scientific letters called UFN.
Revised:  150px Ginzburg was one of the fathers of Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN), editor-in-chief of the scientific letters called UFN.
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Original: A Nobel Prize winner, prominent Russian Academician of the Russian Academy of Sciences and theoretical physicist Vitaly Ginzburg has died on Sunday at the age of 93 years.
Revised:  Nobel Prize winner, prominent Russian Academician of the Russian Academy of Sciences and theoretical physicist Vitaly Ginzburg has died on Sunday at the age of 93 years.
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Original:  Ginzburg reads his Nobel lecture in MSU (2004) Ginzburg was one of the fathers of  Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov  and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN),  editor-in-chief of the scientific letters called UFN.
Revised:  Ginzburg reads his Nobel lecture in MSU (2004) Ginzburg was one of the fathers of the Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN), editor-in-chief of the scientific letters called UFN.
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Original:  Ginzburg reads his Nobel lecture in MSU (2004) Ginzburg was one of the fathers of  Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov  and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN),  editor-in-chief of the scientific letters called UFN.
Revised:  Ginzburg reads his Nobel lecture in MSU (2004) Ginzburg was one of the fathers of Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov , and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN), editor-in-chief of the scientific letters called UFN.
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Original:  Ginzburg reads his Nobel lecture in MSU (2004) Ginzburg was one of the fathers of  Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov  and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN),  editor-in-chief of the scientific letters called UFN.
Revised:  Ginzburg reads his Nobel lecture in MSU (2004) Ginzburg was one of the fathers of Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN), as well as editor-in-chief of the scientific letters called UFN.
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Original:  Ginzburg reads his Nobel lecture in MSU (2004) Ginzburg was one of the fathers of  Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov  and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN),  editor-in-chief of the scientific letters called UFN.
Revised:  Ginzburg reads his Nobel lecture in MSU (2004) Ginzburg was one of the fathers of Soviet hydrogen bomb together with Andrei Sakharov and the head of the Department of Theoretical Physics in the Lebedev Physical Institute of Academy of Sciences (FIAN), editor-in-chief of the scientific journal UFN.
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Original:  He was born in Moscow in 1916,  graduated from the Physics Faculty of Moscow State University in 1938.
Revised:  He was born in Moscow in 1916, and graduated from the Physics Faculty of Moscow State University in 1938.
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Original:  In 2003 he shared his Nobel Prize in Physics together with Alexei Abrikosov and Anthony Leggett for developing the theory behind superconductivity.
Revised:  In 2003 he shared the Nobel Prize in Physics together with Alexei Abrikosov and Anthony Leggett for developing the theory behind superconductivity.
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Original:  He was granted  USSR State Prize in 1953 and  Lenin Prize in 1966.
Revised:  He was granted the USSR State Prize in 1953 and Lenin Prize in 1966.
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Original:  He was granted  USSR State Prize in 1953 and  Lenin Prize in 1966.
Revised:  He was granted USSR State Prize in 1953 and the Lenin Prize in 1966.
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Original:  Civil funeral will be held on Wednesday at the main hall of FIAN.
Revised:  A civil funeral will be held on Wednesday at the main hall of FIAN.
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Original:  In a TV interview, Ginzburg once spoke : "If I believed in God, I would start every morning by saying, 'Thank you, My Lord, for making me a theoretical physicist.'
Revised:  In a TV interview, Ginzburg once said : "If I believed in God, I would start every morning by saying, 'Thank you, My Lord, for making me a theoretical physicist.'
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Original:   But he was an atheist.
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Original:  The pirates are also holding a British couple, Paul and Rachel Chandler, who they seized from a yacht last month  
Revised:  The pirates are also holding a British couple, Paul and Rachel Chandler, who they seized from a yacht last month . 
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Original:  "Our Saps [South African Police Service] members have prevailed yet again.
Revised:  "Our SAPS [South African Police Service] members have prevailed yet again.
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Original:  Anyone who attempts to challenge the police will lose." “ With the festive season upon us, we are bound to see more people trying their luck.
Revised:  Anyone who attempts to challenge the police will lose." " With the festive season upon us, we are bound to see more people trying their luck.
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Original:  But we are ready ensure that our people are not held to ransom by criminals and violent thugs, ” the police chief continued.
Revised:  But we are ready ensure that our people are not held to ransom by criminals and violent thugs, " the police chief continued.
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Original:  He praised the police for what he called their “ swift and efficient action ” .
Revised:  He praised the police for what he called their " swift and efficient action ” .
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Original:  He praised the police for what he called their “ swift and efficient action ” .
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Original: Nokia recalls 14 million phone chargers Image:Nokia 6300 (1).jpg|Nokia announced the recall of 14 million chargers due to safety concerns]] Fourteen million phone chargers have been recalled by Nokia amid fears that they could cause electric shocks.
Revised:  Image:Nokia 6300 (1).jpg|Nokia announced the recall of 14 million chargers due to safety concerns]] Fourteen million phone chargers have been recalled by Nokia amid fears that they could cause electric shocks.
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Original:  The chargers, made by a Chinese firm , BYD are mainly sold in Europe and North America.
Revised:  The chargers, made by the Chinese firm BYD, are mainly sold in Europe and North America.
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Original:  BYD have stated they will pick up the costs of the replacements.
Revised:  BYD has stated that it will pick up the costs of the replacements.
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Original:  Nokia have released a statement saying the recall is a “proactive, precautionary measure” .
Revised:  Nokia has released a statement saying the recall is a “proactive, precautionary measure” .
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Original:  Nokia have released a statement saying the recall is a “proactive, precautionary measure” .
Revised:  Nokia have released a statement saying the recall is a “proactive, precautionary measure” 
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Original:  This comes at the same time as Maclaren USA recalls 1 million pushchairs after reports of children having their fingers amputated
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Original:  Customers can check if there charger is faulty on the Nokia website.
Revised:  Customers can determine whether their charger is faulty on the Nokia website.
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Original:  The country has also agreed to other financial deals with China, mainly in the telecommunications and energy sectors  
Revised:  The country has also agreed to other financial deals with China, mainly in the telecommunications and energy sectors . 
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Original:  We felt that in sending that letter, we would give Beck a chance to show that his purported support for the constition was real.
Revised:  We felt that in sending that letter, we would give Beck a chance to show that his purported support for the constitution was real.
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Original:  Iger has shown great interest in building relationships back up with many companys who have refused to work with Disney until Eisner leaves, such as Pixar Animation and George Lucas.
Revised:  Iger has shown great interest in building relationships back up with many companies who have refused to work with Disney until Eisner leaves, such as Pixar Animation and George Lucas.
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