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Original:  She started high school and afterwards attended Karachi University, where she received her Masters in Journalism in 1971.
Revised:  She started high school and afterwards attended Karachi University, where she earned her Masters in Journalism in 1971.
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Original:  Sultana Meher went to USA in 1991 to join her sons.
Revised:  Sultana Meher went to the US in 1991 to join her sons.
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Original:  There she also continued her Literal activities.
Revised:  There she continued her literary activities.
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Original:  The Urdu Writer Society of North America paid her great tribute for her efforts in Urdu URL Sultana Meher met Jawed Akhtar Choudhry and got married in September 2002.
Revised:  The Urdu Writer Society of North America recognized her efforts in Urdu URL Sultana Meher met Jawed Akhtar Choudhry and got married in September 2002.
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Original:  The Urdu Writer Society of North America paid her great tribute for her efforts in Urdu URL Sultana Meher met Jawed Akhtar Choudhry and got married in September 2002.
Revised:  The Urdu Writer Society of North America paid her great tribute for her efforts in Urdu URL Meher met Jawed Akhtar Choudhry and got married in September 2002.
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Original:  The Urdu Writer Society of North America paid her great tribute for her efforts in Urdu URL Sultana Meher met Jawed Akhtar Choudhry and got married in September 2002.
Revised:  The Urdu Writer Society of North America paid her great tribute for her efforts in Urdu URL Sultana Meher met Jawed Akhtar Choudhry and remarried in September 2002.
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Original:  Since then she lives in Birmingham, United Kingdom.
Revised:  She lives in Birmingham, United Kingdom.
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Original:  In Birmingham she continued her literal activities till URL Employment Sultana Meher started her career with The Daily Hindustan, Bombay, then became an editor of the Ladies section in the newspaper The Daily ANJAAM, Karachi, Pakistan.
Revised:  In Birmingham she continued her literal activities till URL Career Meher started her career with The Daily Hindustan, Bombay, then became an editor of the Ladies section in the newspaper The Daily ANJAAM, Karachi, Pakistan.
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Original:  She joined , The Daily JANG, Karachi and worked there from 1967 to 1979 as a Journalist.
Revised:  She joined Daily JANG, Karachi and worked there from 1967 to 1979 as a Journalist.
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Original:  She published her own Monthly Magazine ‘ ’The Roop” , from 1980 to 1991.
Revised:  She published her own Monthly Magazine ‘ The Roop , from 1980 to 1991.
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Original:  Publications Sultana Meher has written more than 20 books and hundreds of articles in different URL Novels :
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Original:  Publications Sultana Meher has written more than 20 books and hundreds of articles in different URL Novels :
Revised:  Publications Sultana Meher has written more than 20 books and hundreds of articles in different URL Novels 
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Original:  Dagh e Dil 1962 Tajwar 1966 Ik Kiran Ujalay Ki 1969 Jab Basant Rut Aai 1972 SHORT STORIES COLLECTION Band Seepian 1967 Dhoop aur Saiban 1980 Dil Ki Abrooraezi POETRY Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e  URL CRITICISM, COMPILATIONS AND ANTHOLOGIES Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1:
Revised:  Dagh e Dil 1962 Tajwar 1966 Ik Kiran Ujalay Ki 1969 Jab Basant Rut Aai 1972 Story collections Band Seepian 1967 Dhoop aur Saiban 1980 Dil Ki Abrooraezi POETRY Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e URL CRITICISM, COMPILATIONS AND ANTHOLOGIES Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1:
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Original:  Dagh e Dil 1962 Tajwar 1966 Ik Kiran Ujalay Ki 1969 Jab Basant Rut Aai 1972 SHORT STORIES COLLECTION Band Seepian 1967 Dhoop aur Saiban 1980 Dil Ki Abrooraezi POETRY Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e  URL CRITICISM, COMPILATIONS AND ANTHOLOGIES Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1:
Revised:  Dagh e Dil 1962 Tajwar 1966 Ik Kiran Ujalay Ki 1969 Jab Basant Rut Aai 1972 SHORT STORIES COLLECTION Band Seepian 1967 Dhoop aur Saiban 1980 Dil Ki Abrooraezi Poetry Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e URL CRITICISM, COMPILATIONS AND ANTHOLOGIES Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1:
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Original:  Dagh e Dil 1962 Tajwar 1966 Ik Kiran Ujalay Ki 1969 Jab Basant Rut Aai 1972 SHORT STORIES COLLECTION Band Seepian 1967 Dhoop aur Saiban 1980 Dil Ki Abrooraezi POETRY Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e  URL CRITICISM, COMPILATIONS AND ANTHOLOGIES Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1:
Revised:  Dagh e Dil 1962 Tajwar 1966 Ik Kiran Ujalay Ki 1969 Jab Basant Rut Aai 1972 SHORT STORIES COLLECTION Band Seepian 1967 Dhoop aur Saiban 1980 Dil Ki Abrooraezi POETRY Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e Kalam) URL CRITICISM, COMPILATIONS AND ANTHOLOGIES Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1:
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Original:  Dagh e Dil 1962 Tajwar 1966 Ik Kiran Ujalay Ki 1969 Jab Basant Rut Aai 1972 SHORT STORIES COLLECTION Band Seepian 1967 Dhoop aur Saiban 1980 Dil Ki Abrooraezi POETRY Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e  URL CRITICISM, COMPILATIONS AND ANTHOLOGIES Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1:
Revised:  Dagh e Dil 1962 Tajwar 1966 Ik Kiran Ujalay Ki 1969 Jab Basant Rut Aai 1972 SHORT STORIES COLLECTION Band Seepian 1967 Dhoop aur Saiban 1980 Dil Ki Abrooraezi POETRY Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e URL Criticism, Compilations and Anthologies Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1:
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Original:  The Urdu Writer Society of North America recognized her efforts in Urdu URL Meher met Jawed Akhtar Choudhry and remarried in September 2002.
Revised:  The Urdu Writer Society of North America recognized her efforts in Urdu literature. Meher met Jawed Akhtar Choudhry and remarried in September 2002.
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Original:  She lives in Birmingham, United URL Publications Sultana Meher has written more than 20 books and hundreds of URL Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e Kalam) URL Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1: 1978,1989 & 2000 Sukhanwar Vol 2: 1996 Sukhanwar Vol 3: 1998 Sukhanwar Vol 4: 2000 Sukhanwar Vol5: 2004 Guftanee Vol 1:( Nasar NgarooN ka Tazkara) 2000 Guftanee Vol 2: (Nasar NagarooN ka Tazkara) 2004
Revised:  She lives in Birmingham, United Kingdom. Publications Sultana Meher has written more than 20 books and hundreds of URL Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e Kalam) URL Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1: 1978,1989 & 2000 Sukhanwar Vol 2: 1996 Sukhanwar Vol 3: 1998 Sukhanwar Vol 4: 2000 Sukhanwar Vol5: 2004 Guftanee Vol 1:( Nasar NgarooN ka Tazkara) 2000 Guftanee Vol 2: (Nasar NagarooN ka Tazkara) 2004
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Original:  She lives in Birmingham, United URL Publications Sultana Meher has written more than 20 books and hundreds of URL Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e Kalam) URL Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1: 1978,1989 & 2000 Sukhanwar Vol 2: 1996 Sukhanwar Vol 3: 1998 Sukhanwar Vol 4: 2000 Sukhanwar Vol5: 2004 Guftanee Vol 1:( Nasar NgarooN ka Tazkara) 2000 Guftanee Vol 2: (Nasar NagarooN ka Tazkara) 2004
Revised:  She lives in Birmingham, United URL Publications Sultana Meher has written more than 20 books and hundreds of articles Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e Kalam) URL Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1: 1978,1989 & 2000 Sukhanwar Vol 2: 1996 Sukhanwar Vol 3: 1998 Sukhanwar Vol 4: 2000 Sukhanwar Vol5: 2004 Guftanee Vol 1:( Nasar NgarooN ka Tazkara) 2000 Guftanee Vol 2: (Nasar NagarooN ka Tazkara) 2004
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Original:  She lives in Birmingham, United URL Publications Sultana Meher has written more than 20 books and hundreds of URL Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e Kalam) URL Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1: 1978,1989 & 2000 Sukhanwar Vol 2: 1996 Sukhanwar Vol 3: 1998 Sukhanwar Vol 4: 2000 Sukhanwar Vol5: 2004 Guftanee Vol 1:( Nasar NgarooN ka Tazkara) 2000 Guftanee Vol 2: (Nasar NagarooN ka Tazkara) 2004
Revised:  She lives in Birmingham, United URL Publications Sultana Meher has written more than 20 books and hundreds of URL Harf e Mohtaber ( Majmooa e Kalam) 1996 Aaj Ki Shairaat 1974 Iqbal Daure Jadeed Ki Awaaz 1977 Sahir Ka Fun aur Shakhsiat 1989 Sukhanwar (Tazkara e Shura e URL Sukhanwar Vol 1: 1978,1989 & 2000 Sukhanwar Vol 2: 1996 Sukhanwar Vol 3: 1998 Sukhanwar Vol 4: 2000 Sukhanwar Vol5: 2004 Guftanee Vol 1:( Nasar NgarooN ka Tazkara) 2000 Guftanee Vol 2: (Nasar NagarooN ka Tazkara) 2004
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Original:  Her father passed away when she was 13, forcing her to stop her education.
Revised:  Her father died when she was 13, forcing her to stop her education.
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Original: Functional somatic syndrome is a term used to refer to physical symptoms that are poorly explained .
Revised: The term Functional Somatic Syndrome (FSS) refers to a group of chronic diagnoses with no identifiable organic cause .
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Original:    Signs and symptoms Functional somatic syndrome is characterized by ambiguous, non-specific symptoms that appear in otherwise-healthy people.
Revised:  Signs and symptoms Functional somatic syndromes are characterized by ambiguous, non-specific symptoms that appear in otherwise-healthy people.
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Original:  Overlap exists in different syndromes , including gastrointestinal issues, pain, fatigue, cognitive difficulties, and sleep difficulties.
Revised:  Overlap in symptomology exists across diagnoses , including gastrointestinal issues, pain, fatigue, cognitive difficulties, and sleep difficulties.
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Original:  A shocking majority of patients presenting with persistent, widespread somatic complaints have no identifiable organic cause.
Revised:  A majority of patients presenting with persistent, widespread somatic complaints have no identifiable organic cause.
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Original:  Biological markers for the FSS diagnoses are non-existent, making the categorization even more difficult;
Revised:  Biological markers for the FSS diagnoses are non-existent, making the categorization difficult;
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Original:  Diagnosis Diagnosis of a FSS is usually conducted in a “ rule-out ” method, where physicians rule out other rheumatology disorders with existing biomarkers prior to arriving at a FSS diagnosis.
Revised:  Diagnosis Diagnosis of a FSS is usually conducted in a " rule-out ” method, where physicians rule out other rheumatology disorders with existing biomarkers prior to arriving at a FSS diagnosis.
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Original:  Diagnosis Diagnosis of a FSS is usually conducted in a “ rule-out ” method, where physicians rule out other rheumatology disorders with existing biomarkers prior to arriving at a FSS diagnosis.
Revised:  Diagnosis Diagnosis of a FSS is usually conducted in a “ rule-out " method, where physicians rule out other rheumatology disorders with existing biomarkers prior to arriving at a FSS diagnosis.
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Original:  It encompass disorders such as chronic fatigue syndrome, fibromyalgia, chronic widespread pain, temporomandibular disorder, irritable bowel syndrome, lower back pain, tension headache, atypical face pain, non-cardiac chest pain, insomnia, palpitation, dyspepsia and dizziness.
Revised:  It encompasses disorders such as chronic fatigue syndrome, fibromyalgia, chronic widespread pain, temporomandibular disorder, irritable bowel syndrome, lower back pain, tension headache, atypical face pain, non-cardiac chest pain, insomnia, palpitation, dyspepsia and dizziness.
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Original:  This term was coined by Dr Hemanth Samkumar.
Revised:  This term was coined by Hemanth Samkumar.
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Original:  Biological factors One commonly cited hypothesis in the literature implicates the hypothalamic-pituitary-adrenal axis (HPA axis) and cortisol secretion in the manifestation of somatic symptoms following trauma.
Revised:  Biological factors One commonly cited hypothesis in the literature implicates the hypothalamic–pituitary–adrenal axis (HPA axis) and cortisol secretion in the manifestation of somatic symptoms following trauma.
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Original:  The HPA axis plays a major role in moderating the body ’ s stress response to both emotional and physical pain, relating to both the experience of psychological symptoms prevalent following trauma as well as the physiological symptoms prevalent in FSS conditions.
Revised:  The HPA axis plays a major role in moderating the body ' s stress response to both emotional and physical pain, relating to both the experience of psychological symptoms prevalent following trauma as well as the physiological symptoms prevalent in FSS conditions.
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Original:  Current theories propose an “attentional bias” as the psychological mechanism by which trauma and somatic symptoms are tied.
Revised:  Current theories propose an "attentional bias" as the psychological mechanism by which trauma and somatic symptoms are tied.
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Original:  This attentional bias leads to a “ health anxiety, ” where the patient becomes increasingly concerned that common somatic symptoms are related to a physical disease or injury, and therefore, another potential bodily threat.
Revised:  This attentional bias leads to a " health anxiety, ” where the patient becomes increasingly concerned that common somatic symptoms are related to a physical disease or injury, and therefore, another potential bodily threat.
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Original:  This attentional bias leads to a “ health anxiety, ” where the patient becomes increasingly concerned that common somatic symptoms are related to a physical disease or injury, and therefore, another potential bodily threat.
Revised:  This attentional bias leads to a “ health anxiety, " where the patient becomes increasingly concerned that common somatic symptoms are related to a physical disease or injury, and therefore, another potential bodily threat.
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Original:  He enlisted with the Royal Canadian Air Force during the Second World War but was turned away due to his tuberculosis. 
Revised:  He enlisted with the Royal Canadian Air Force during the Second World War but was turned away due to his tuberculosis. Career
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Original: Walter Perry Dieter , (31 May 1916 – 7 September 1988) was a Canadian First Nations leader.
Revised: Walter Perry Deiter , (31 May 1916 – 7 September 1988) was a Canadian First Nations leader.
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Original:  Dieter was a Cree, born on the Peepeekisis Reserve near Balcarres, Saskatchewan.
Revised:  Deiter was born on the Peepeekisis Reserve near Balcarres, Saskatchewan.
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Original:   Career He enlisted with the Royal Canadian Air Force during the Second World War but was turned away due to his tuberculosis .
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Original:  His biography as recorded in the Saskatchewan Indian magazine offers the following information:  In 1958 "he and his wife , Inez , were the driving force in laying down the foundations for the inauguration of the Saskatoon Friendship Centre."
Revised:  His biography as recorded in the Saskatchewan Indian magazine offers the following information: Career In 1958 "he and his wife , Inez , were the driving force in laying down the foundations for the inauguration of the Saskatoon Friendship Centre."
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Original:  His biography as recorded in the Saskatchewan Indian magazine offers the following information:  In 1958 "he and his wife , Inez , were the driving force in laying down the foundations for the inauguration of the Saskatoon Friendship Centre."
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Original:  His biography as recorded in the Saskatchewan Indian magazine offers the following information:  In 1958 "he and his wife , Inez , were the driving force in laying down the foundations for the inauguration of the Saskatoon Friendship Centre."
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Original:  In 1966, he became head of the Federation of Saskatchewan Indian Nations and served in that role until 1968. "...negotiated with former Saskatchewan Premier Ross Thatcher  for a five per cent hiring policy of Indian and Metis people within the provincial government.
Revised:  In 1966, he became head of the Federation of Saskatchewan Indian Nations and served in that role until 1968. During this time, he negotiated with then Premier Ross Thatcher for a five per cent hiring policy of Indian and Metis people within the provincial government.
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Original:  In 1966, he became head of the Federation of Saskatchewan Indian Nations and served in that role until 1968. "...negotiated with former Saskatchewan Premier Ross Thatcher  for a five per cent hiring policy of Indian and Metis people within the provincial government.
Revised:  In 1966, he became head of the Federation of Saskatchewan Indian Nations and served in that role until 1968. "...negotiated with former Saskatchewan Premier Ross Thatcher , for a five per cent hiring policy of Indian and Metis people within the provincial government.
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Original:  In 1966, he became head of the Federation of Saskatchewan Indian Nations and served in that role until 1968. "...negotiated with former Saskatchewan Premier Ross Thatcher  for a five per cent hiring policy of Indian and Metis people within the provincial government.
Revised:  In 1966, he became head of the Federation of Saskatchewan Indian Nations and served in that role until 1968. "...negotiated with former Saskatchewan Premier Ross Thatcher for a five percent hiring policy of Indian and Metis people within the provincial government.
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Original:  " "...instrumental in designing the first plans for the native-controlled Native Metal Industry" still in operation as of 1980.
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Original:  " "...instrumental in designing the first plans for the native-controlled Native Metal Industry" still in operation as of 1980.
Revised:  " He was also heavily involved in developing the first plans for the native-controlled Native Metal Industry" still in operation as of 1980.
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Original:  " "...instrumental in designing the first plans for the native-controlled Native Metal Industry" still in operation as of 1980.
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Original:  " "...instrumental in designing the first plans for the native-controlled Native Metal Industry" still in operation as of 1980.
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Original:  " "...instrumental in designing the first plans for the native-controlled Native Metal Industry" still in operation as of 1980.
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Original:  Delia Opeekokew." "Deiter (sic) and his staffhelped to organize two neighboring native organizations, the Indian Association of Alberta and the Manitoba Indian Brotherhood.
Revised:  Delia Opeekokew." With his staff, Deiter helped organize the Indian Association of Alberta and the Manitoba Indian Brotherhood.
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Original:  " He went on "... to establish the National Indian Brotherhood ." In 1970 "with a few friends, formed the Native Alcohol Council ." Band Council member at Peepeekisis.
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Original:  " He went on "... to establish the National Indian Brotherhood ." In 1970 "with a few friends, formed the Native Alcohol Council ." Band Council member at Peepeekisis.
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Original:  " He went on "... to establish the National Indian Brotherhood ." In 1970 "with a few friends, formed the Native Alcohol Council ." Band Council member at Peepeekisis.
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Original:  " He went on "... to establish the National Indian Brotherhood ." In 1970 "with a few friends, formed the Native Alcohol Council ." Band Council member at Peepeekisis.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1978- FSI consultant In 1980 he is recorded as being " Southern President of the Saskatchewan Indian Veterans' Association.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1978- FSI consultant In 1980 , he also served as the Southern President of the Saskatchewan Indian Veterans' Association.
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Original:  " In 1980 he was appointed an Officer of the Order of Canada for his work towards better education and social conditions for aboriginal Canadians .
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Original: Walter Perry Deiter , (31 May 1916 – 7 September 1988) was a Canadian First Nations leader.
Revised: Walter Perry Deiter (31 May 1916 – 7 September 1988) was a Canadian First Nations leader.
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Original:  an innovative media training and production mobile studio that has been touring Quebec’s Aboriginal communities offering audio-visual training internships for young First nation people.
Revised:  an media training and production mobile studio that has been touring Quebec’s Aboriginal communities offering audio-visual training internships for young First nation people.
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