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Original:  Whirlpool — a vortex analogous to that created by water draining above a strudel .
Revised:  Whirlpool — a vortex analogous to that created by water draining above a strudel 
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Original:  This is a normal physiological process occurring throughout life , but accelerated tooth wear can become a problem .
Revised:  This is a normal physiological process occurring throughout life ; but with increasing lifespan of individuals and increasing retention of teeth for life, the incidence of non-carious tooth surface loss has also shown a rise .
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Original:  TWI scores each visible surface (buccal/B, cervical/C, lingual/L and occlusal-incisal/  I) (see Table 2 ).
Revised:  TWI scores each visible surface (buccal/B, cervical/C, lingual/L and occlusal-incisal/ O/ I) (see Table 2 ).
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Original:  Dental erosion is rarely seen in the archaeological record, but certain cases have been described suggesting acidic fruits and/or plants where regularly consumed.
Revised:  Dental erosion is rarely seen in the archaeological record, but certain cases have been described suggesting acidic fruits and/or plants were regularly consumed.
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Original:  The frequency of repeating the index ranges from 6–12 months depending on the risk level of patients.  +Table 1: Basic Erosive Wear Examination ScoringBEWE Score Clinical appearance description0No erosive tooth wear1Initial loss of surface texture2Distinct defect, hard tissue loss <50\% of the surface area3Hard tissue loss ≥50\% of the surface area  Tooth wear index The Tooth Wear Index (TWI) (see Table 2) was developed by Smith and Knight in 1984.
Revised:  The frequency of repeating the index ranges from 6–12 months depending on the risk level of patients. +Table 1: Basic Erosive Wear Examination Scoring !BEWE Score !Clinical appearance description |- |0 |No erosive tooth wear |- |1 |Initial loss of surface texture2Distinct defect, hard tissue loss <50\% of the surface area3Hard tissue loss ≥50\% of the surface area Tooth wear index The Tooth Wear Index (TWI) (see Table 2) was developed by Smith and Knight in 1984.
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Original:  The frequency of repeating the index ranges from 6–12 months depending on the risk level of patients.  +Table 1: Basic Erosive Wear Examination ScoringBEWE Score Clinical appearance description0No erosive tooth wear1Initial loss of surface texture2Distinct defect, hard tissue loss <50\% of the surface area3Hard tissue loss ≥50\% of the surface area  Tooth wear index The Tooth Wear Index (TWI) (see Table 2) was developed by Smith and Knight in 1984.
Revised:  The frequency of repeating the index ranges from 6–12 months depending on the risk level of patients. +Table 1: Basic Erosive Wear Examination ScoringBEWE Score Clinical appearance description0No erosive tooth wear1Initial loss of surface texture2Distinct defect, hard tissue loss <50\% of the surface area |- |3 |Hard tissue loss ≥50\% of the surface area Tooth wear index The Tooth Wear Index (TWI) (see Table 2) was developed by Smith and Knight in 1984.
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Original:  The frequency of repeating the index ranges from 6–12 months depending on the risk level of patients.  +Table 1: Basic Erosive Wear Examination ScoringBEWE Score Clinical appearance description0No erosive tooth wear1Initial loss of surface texture2Distinct defect, hard tissue loss <50\% of the surface area3Hard tissue loss ≥50\% of the surface area  Tooth wear index The Tooth Wear Index (TWI) (see Table 2) was developed by Smith and Knight in 1984.
Revised:  The frequency of repeating the index ranges from 6–12 months depending on the risk level of patients. +Table 1: Basic Erosive Wear Examination ScoringBEWE Score Clinical appearance description0No erosive tooth wear1Initial loss of surface texture2Distinct defect, hard tissue loss <50\% of the surface area3Hard tissue loss ≥50\% of the surface area | Tooth wear index The Tooth Wear Index (TWI) (see Table 2) was developed by Smith and Knight in 1984.
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Original: Tooth wear is majorly the result of  three processes;
Revised: Tooth wear is predominantly the result of three processes;
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Original:  Tooth wear is a complex, multi-factorial problem and there is  difficulty identifying a single causative factor.
Revised:  Tooth wear is a complex, multi-factorial problem and there is often difficulty identifying a single causative factor.
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Original:  Toothewear index can provide checklists to the most likely diagnosis.
Revised:  Tooth wear evaluation system (TWES) may help determine the most likely diagnosis.
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Original:  Erosion may occur with excessive consumption of acidic foods and drinks, or medical conditions involving repeated regurgitation and reflux of gastric acid.  derived from the Latin word erosum, which describes the action ‘to corrode’.
Revised:  Erosion may occur with excessive consumption of acidic foods and drinks, or medical conditions involving repeated regurgitation and reflux of gastric acid. It is derived from the Latin word erosum, which describes the action ‘to corrode’.
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Original:  Dental erosion is rarely seen in the archaeological record, but certain cases have been described suggesting acidic fruits and/or plants were regularly consumed.
Revised:  Dental erosion is rarely seen in the archaeological record, but certain cases have been described which suggested acidic fruits and/or plants were regularly consumed.
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Original:  Basic erosive wear examination The Basic Erosive Wear Examination was first described in 2008 by Bartlett et al.
Revised:  Basic erosive wear examination The Basic Erosive Wear Examination was first described by Bartlett et al.
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Original:  Once this has been achieved a decision needs to be made whether or not it is necessary to carry out restorative treatment or if it can simply be managed by non invasive methods.
Revised:  Once this has been achieved a decision needs to be made whether or not it is necessary to carry out restorative treatment or if it can simply be managed by non-invasive methods.
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Original:  Where the occlusion is reorganised this can first be tested using reversible method i.e.  hard occlusal splint  .
Revised:  Where the occlusion is reorganised , it can first be tested using reversible method i.e. hard occlusal splint .
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Original:  Where the occlusion is reorganised this can first be tested using reversible method i.e.  hard occlusal splint  .
Revised:  Where the occlusion is reorganised this can first be tested using a reversible method ( i.e. hard occlusal splint .
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Original:  Where the occlusion is reorganised this can first be tested using reversible method i.e.  hard occlusal splint  .
Revised:  Where the occlusion is reorganised this can first be tested using reversible method i.e. a hard occlusal splint .
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Original:  Where the occlusion is reorganised this can first be tested using reversible method i.e.  hard occlusal splint  .
Revised:  Where the occlusion is reorganised this can first be tested using reversible method i.e. hard occlusal splint ) .
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Original:  There are three different potential scenarios . excessive wear with loss of OVD excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Type 1 is relatively common, whereas type 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
Revised:  There are three potential scenarios of tooth wear: Excessive wear with loss of OVD excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Type 1 is relatively common, whereas type 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
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Original:  There are three different potential scenarios . excessive wear with loss of OVD excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Type 1 is relatively common, whereas type 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
Revised:  There are three different potential scenarios . excessive wear with loss of OVD Excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Type 1 is relatively common, whereas type 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
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Original:  There are three different potential scenarios . excessive wear with loss of OVD excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Type 1 is relatively common, whereas type 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
Revised:  There are three different potential scenarios . excessive wear with loss of OVD excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available Excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Type 1 is relatively common, whereas type 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
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Original:  There are three different potential scenarios . excessive wear with loss of OVD excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Type 1 is relatively common, whereas type 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
Revised:  There are three different potential scenarios . excessive wear with loss of OVD excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Scenario 1 is relatively common, whereas type 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
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Original:  There are three different potential scenarios . excessive wear with loss of OVD excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Type 1 is relatively common, whereas type 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
Revised:  There are three different potential scenarios . excessive wear with loss of OVD excessive wear without loss of OVD but with space available excessive wear without loss of OVD but with limited space available Type 1 is relatively common, whereas scenario 2 is quite rare and tends to occur when the wear is rapidly occurring.
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Original:  Type 3 occurs due to a phenomenon called dentoalveolar compensation whereby the dentoalveolar tissues compensate for wear of teeth by increasing the bony support in order to maintain a constant OVD.
Revised:  Scenario 3 occurs due to a phenomenon called dentoalveolar compensation whereby the dentoalveolar tissues compensate for wear of teeth by increasing the bony support in order to maintain a constant OVD.
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Original:  The options for restoring this loss in tooth height are the following increasing the OVD -
Revised:  The options for restoring this loss in tooth height are : Increasing the OVD -
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Original:  this is the traditional approach and involves restoring all teeth to an increased height in order to create a new ICP at an increased OVD occlusal adjustment -
Revised:  this is the traditional approach and involves restoring all teeth to an increased height in order to create a new ICP at an increased OVD Occlusal adjustment -
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Original:  this is typically used for anterior teeth only, whereby the patient's occlusion is reorganised into the RCP position to utilise increased space in this position crown lengthening or orthodontic extrusion -
Revised:  this is typically used for anterior teeth only, whereby the patient's occlusion is reorganised into the RCP position to utilise increased space in this position Crown lengthening or orthodontic extrusion -
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Original:  this is useful when crowns are to be placed in a worn dentition but there is inadequate crown height and you do not want to change the OVD relative axial tooth movement -
Revised:  this is useful when crowns are to be placed in a worn dentition but there is inadequate crown height and you do not want to change the OVD Relative axial tooth movement -
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Original:  He   died in 1927.
Revised:  He He died in 1927.
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Original: URL cleaning is part of oral hygiene and involves the removal of dental plaque from teeth with the intention of preventing cavities (dental caries), gingivitis, and periodontal disease.
Revised: Teeth cleaning is part of oral hygiene and involves the removal of dental plaque from teeth with the intention of preventing cavities (dental caries), gingivitis, and periodontal disease.
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Original:  Professional cleaning includes tooth scaling and tooth polishingand debridement if too much tartar has accumulated.
Revised:  Professional cleaning includes tooth scaling , tooth polishing, debridement if too much tartar has accumulated.
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Original:  Professional cleaning includes tooth scaling, tooth polishing,  debridement if too much tartar has accumulated.
Revised:  Professional cleaning includes tooth scaling, tooth polishing, and debridement if too much tartar has accumulated.
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Original:  The Zambian government established a wild life conservation fund to act as the responsible player for redistributing funds from the hunting industry into wild life conservation and community development. 4
Revised:  The Zambian government established a wild life conservation fund to act as the responsible player for redistributing funds from the hunting industry into wild life conservation and community development. 
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Original: Wildlife Conservation Wildlife conservation is a costly endeavor for most African countries.
Revised: "WILDLIFE CONSERVATION" Wildlife conservation is a costly endeavor for most African countries.
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Original:  One of the more common forms of generating income to establish a sustainable economy to provide for wildlife conservation is known as wildlife viewing tourism.
Revised:  One of the more common form of generating income to establish a sustainable economy to provide for wildlife conservation is known as wildlife viewing tourism.
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Original:  For regions that suffer political and economic instability ;
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Original:   Many African countries benefit from community based conservation.
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Original:  The Zambian government established a wild life conservation fund to act as the responsible player for redistributing funds from the hunting industry into wild life conservation and community development  .
Revised:  The Zambian government established a wild life conservation fund to act as the responsible player for redistributing funds from the hunting industry into wild life conservation and community development ................... .
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Original:  This stems from the context of wealth, class, and race which are said have created a diverse range of problems for local communities.
Revised:  This stems from the context of wealth, class, and race which have created a diverse range of problems for local communities.
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Original:  It was a controversial recommendation and created a standoff in the URL It is one of the few house committees that dewelled into indiscipline in a State Assembly.
Revised:  It was a recommendation that created a standoff in the URL It is one of the few house committees that dewelled into indiscipline in a State Assembly.
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Original:  It was a recommendation that created a standoff in the URL It is one of the few house committees that dewelled into indiscipline in a State Assembly.
Revised:  It was a recommendation that created a standoff in the Assembly. It is one of the few house committees that dewelled into indiscipline in a State Assembly.
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Original: Bharatiya Janata Party M. P Appachu Ranjan (born 11 September 1957) is an Indian politician who was the Former Minister for Youth Services and Sports in Karnataka, a state in Southern India.
Revised:  M. P Appachu Ranjan (born 11 September 1957) is an Indian politician who was the Former Minister for Youth Services and Sports in Karnataka, a state in Southern India.
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Original:  Mr. Ranjan is a member of the State BJP Executive Committee and was in charge of Mysore URL In 2012, he was inducted as Cabinet Minister for Youth Services and Sports in Jagadish Shettar’s cabinet and was made the District in-charge minister of Kodagu District.
Revised:  Mr. Ranjan is a member of the State BJP Executive Committee and was in charge of Mysore division.Article Title In 2012, he was inducted as Cabinet Minister for Youth Services and Sports in Jagadish Shettar’s cabinet and was made the District in-charge minister of Kodagu District.
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Original: Marital rape While commenting on marital rape, Bobde remarked that when a man and a woman live as husband and wife, that act of sexual intercourse between them could not be called rape.
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Original: The peebs are made out of wood and then lacquered.
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Original: The  are made out of wood and then lacquered.
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Original: The Honolulu URL Scaff advised his runners to follow the "talk test", an idea that had originated from  Lydiard in which runners should be going slow enough to be able to hold a conversation.
Revised: The Honolulu URL Scaff advised his runners to follow the "talk test", an idea that had originated from Arthur Lydiard in which runners should be going slow enough to be able to hold a conversation.
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Original:  Long slow distance training is a form of continuous training performed at a constant pace of low to moderate intensity over an extended distance or duration.
Revised:  Long slow distance training is a form of continuous training performed at a constant pace at low to moderate intensity over an extended distance or duration.
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Original:   Long slow distance training is thought not to be effective when used in isolation by well-trained athletes, who in order to achieve further improvements in metabolic conditioning require higher training intensities that are not sustainable at the work durations associated with LSD .
Revised:  Although Long slow distance training is thought not to be effective when used in isolation by well-trained athletes, who in order to achieve further improvements in metabolic conditioning require higher training intensities that are not sustainable at the work durations associated with LSD .
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Original:   Long slow distance training is thought not to be effective when used in isolation by well-trained athletes, who in order to achieve further improvements in metabolic conditioning require higher training intensities that are not sustainable at the work durations associated with LSD .
Revised:  Long slow distance training is not effective when used in isolation by well-trained athletes, who in order to achieve further improvements in metabolic conditioning require higher training intensities that are not sustainable at the work durations associated with LSD .
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Original:  Although Long slow distance training is not effective when used in isolation by well-trained athletes, there is substantial evidence that Elite athletes spend 70\% percent or more of their training time at LSD output levels, that Long Slow Distance effort levels are a necessary part of the training of world class athletes URL and that LSD workouts are primary drivers of the lower resting heart rates seen in well conditioned URL
Revised:  Although Long slow distance training is not effective when used in isolation by well-trained athletes, there is substantial evidence that Elite athletes spend 70\% percent or more of their training time at LSD output levels, that Long Slow Distance effort levels are a necessary part of the training of world class athletes URL and that LSD workouts are primary drivers of the lower resting heart rates seen in well conditioned athletes.
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Original: Long slow distance (LSD) is a form of aerobic endurance training used in sports including URL rowing, skiing URL and URL Ed and Ed Pavalka.
Revised: Long slow distance (LSD) is a form of aerobic endurance training used in sports including running, rowing, skiing URL and URL Ed and Ed Pavalka.
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Original:  Although Long slow distance training is not effective when used in isolation by well-trained athletes, there is substantial evidence that Elite athletes spend 70\% percent or more of their training time at LSD output levels, that Long Slow Distance effort levels are a necessary part of the training of world class URL and that LSD workouts are primary drivers of the lower resting heart rates seen in well conditioned athletes.
Revised:  Although Long slow distance training is not effective when used in isolation by well-trained athletes, there is substantial evidence that Elite athletes spend 70\% percent or more of their training time at LSD output levels, that Long Slow Distance effort levels are a necessary part of the training of world class athletes, and that LSD workouts are primary drivers of the lower resting heart rates seen in well conditioned athletes.
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Original: The Honolulu URL Scaff advised his runners to follow the "talk test", an idea that had originated from Arthur Lydiard in which runners should be going slow enough to be able to hold a conversation.
Revised: The Honolulu Marathon Scaff advised his runners to follow the "talk test", an idea that had originated from Arthur Lydiard in which runners should be going slow enough to be able to hold a conversation.
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Original:  He documented the success of six competitive runners who followed in one form or another an LSD training regime, sometimes combining a few more strenuous workouts with the regular long slow distance running with weekly mileages ranging from 50-60 to 120–150 miles per week, with marathon personal bests between 2:14 and 2:50 hours.
Revised:  He documented the success of six competitive runners who followed in one form or another an LSD training regime, sometimes combining a few more strenuous workouts with the regular long slow distance running with weekly mileages ranging from to per week, with marathon personal bests between 2:14 and 2:50 hours.
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Original:  A typical 5k runner might consider 8 to 10 miles of LSD, while a marathoner might run 20 or moremiles . LSD runs are typically done at an easy pace, 1–3 minutes per mile slower than a runner's 10k pace.
Revised:  A typical 5k runner might consider of LSD, while a marathoner might run 20 or moremiles . LSD runs are typically done at an easy pace, 1–3 minutes per mile slower than a runner's 10k pace.
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Original:  A typical 5k runner might consider 8 to 10 miles of LSD, while a marathoner might run 20 or moremiles . LSD runs are typically done at an easy pace, 1–3 minutes per mile slower than a runner's 10k pace.
Revised:  A typical 5k runner might consider 8 to 10 miles of LSD, while a marathoner might run or more . LSD runs are typically done at an easy pace, 1–3 minutes per mile slower than a runner's 10k pace.
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Original: Personal life Admiral Bülent Bostanoğlu is married to Ceyda Bostanoğlu, with whom he has two children: son Mert and daughter Deniz.
Revised: Personal life Admiral Bülent Bostanoğlu was married to Ceyda Bostanoğlu, with whom he has two children: son Mert and daughter Deniz.
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