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Original:  Since excavation began, Djehuty's tomb has yielded a number of surprises , beginning with the discovery that the tomb was re-used repeatedly up to and during the Greco-Roman period , an unusual face-on depiction of pharaoh Thutmosis III hunting ducks, and the mummy of a young, bejewelled, as-yet unidentified woman.
Revised:  Since excavation began, Djehuty's tomb has yielded a number of surprises , beginning with the discovery that the tomb was re-used repeatedly up to and during the Greco-Roman period . There is an unusual face-on depiction of pharaoh Thutmosis III hunting ducks, and the mummy of a young, bejewelled, as-yet unidentified woman.
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Original:  According to a press release by Zahi Hawass, the Secretary-General of Egypt's Supreme Council of Antiquities, Djehuty's tomb is only the fifth known decorated burial chamber of the 18th dynasty.
Revised:  According to a press release by Hawass, Djehuty's tomb is only the fifth known decorated burial chamber of the 18th dynasty.
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Original: A team of archaeologists who excavated an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the Valley of the Kings burial site in Luxor, Egypt.
Revised: A team of archaeologists excavating an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the Valley of the Kings burial site in Luxor, Egypt.
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Original:  Hatshepsut reigned approximately 1479-1458 BCE according to Dr. Zahi Hawass, Secretary General of Egypt’s Supreme Council of Antiquities.
Revised:  Hatshepsut reigned approximately 1479-1458 BCE .
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Original:  File:Hatshepsut.jpg|Djehuty was an official of Hatshepsut The lower chamber also displays passages from the Egyptian funerary text the Book the Dead on its walls and a colorful mural of the goddess Nut, an embodiment of the heavens, on the ceiling.
Revised:  The lower chamber also displays passages from the Egyptian funerary text the Book the Dead on its walls and a colorful mural of the goddess Nut, an embodiment of the heavens, on the ceiling.
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Original: The lower chamber also displays passages from the Egyptian funerary text the Book  the Dead on its walls and a colorful mural of the goddess Nut, an embodiment of the heavens, on the ceiling.
Revised: The lower chamber also displays passages from the Egyptian funerary text the Book of the Dead on its walls and a colorful mural of the goddess Nut, an embodiment of the heavens, on the ceiling.
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Original:  Cope had a 35 year career announcing Steelers games with his familiar scratchy Polish voice, often punctuated with unique expressions which brought delight to fans
Revised:  Cope had a 35 year career announcing Steelers games with his familiar scratchy voice, often punctuated with unique expressions which brought delight to fans
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Original:  The integrated circuit paved the way in the the development of the microchip used today in computers, DVD players, interactive video games and cell phones  
Revised:  The integrated circuit paved the way in the development of the microchip used today in computers, DVD players, interactive video games and cell phones 
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Original:  The integrated circuit paved the way in the the development of the microchip used today in computers, DVD players, interactive video games and cell phones  
Revised:  The integrated circuit paved the way in the the development of the microchip used today in computers, DVD players, interactive video games and cell phones . 
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Original:  It was said of him in a statement by TI chairman Tom Engihous that, "In my opinion, there are only a handful of people whose works have truly transformed the world and the way we live in it — Henry Ford, Thomas Edison, the Wright Brothers and Jack Kilby.  
Revised:  It was said of him in a statement by TI chairman Tom Engihous that, "In my opinion, there are only a handful of people whose works have truly transformed the world and the way we live in it — Henry Ford, Thomas Edison, the Wright Brothers and Jack Kilby. " 
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Original: Kilby is credited with earning 60 patents.
Revised: Kilby 's work includes the awarding of 60 patents.
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Original:  The invention also led to solid state electronics able to withstand more shock and impact in handling  
Revised:  The invention also led to solid state electronics able to withstand more shock and impact in handling . 
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Original:  This invention was the predecessor to the semiconductor that ultimately replaced vacuum tubes and switching wires then in use as the transitor devices.
Revised:  This invention was the predecessor to the semiconductor that ultimately replaced vacuum tubes and switching wires then in use as the transistor devices.
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Original:  Although the next U.S. presidential election is more than three years away, U.S. senator Joseph Biden (Democrat – Delaware) has already announced his intentions of running.
Revised: Senator Joe Biden Although the next U.S. presidential election is more than three years away, U.S. senator Joseph Biden (Democrat – Delaware) has already announced his intentions of running.
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Original:  He is a top-ranking Democrat on the Senate Foreign Relations Committee where he receives press coverage for his criticism of the U.S. administration's handling of the war  
Revised:  He is a top-ranking Democrat on the Senate Foreign Relations Committee where he receives press coverage for his criticism of the U.S. administration's handling of the war . 
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Original: The 18 man crew currently on the International Space Station (ISS) has been put on red alert and are evacuating to the Russian Soyuz capsule in preparation for a possible impact with space debris.
Revised: The crew currently of the International Space Station (ISS) has been put on red alert and are evacuating to the Russian Soyuz capsule in preparation for a possible impact with space debris.
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Original: The 18 man crew currently on the International Space Station (ISS) has been put on red alert and are evacuating to the Russian Soyuz capsule in preparation for a possible impact with space debris.
Revised: The 18 man crew currently on the International Space Station (ISS) was briefly evacuated to the Russian Soyuz capsule in preparation for a possible impact with space debris.
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Original:   "As a contingency, NASA’s Expedition 18 Commander Mike Fincke, Russian Flight Engineer Yury Lonchakov, and NASA’s Sandra Magnus may be asked to “evacuate” into the Russian Soyuz, which would serve as their means of departing from the Station - should it be required," added NASA 
Revised:  "As a contingency, NASA’s Expedition 18 Commander Mike Fincke, Russian Flight Engineer Yury Lonchakov, and NASA’s Sandra Magnus may be asked to "evacuate" into the Russian Soyuz, which would serve as their means of departing from the Station - should it be required," added NASA 
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Original: In memos published by NASAspaceflight.com, the object is described as "elliptical with a low perigee" and it is still unclear what kind of damage the debris would cause if it collided with the ISS. "Tracking of the small piece of debris/MMOD (Micrometeoroid Orbital Debris) was initially classed as a low threat of collision with the ISS.
Revised: In memos published by NASAspaceflight.com, the object was described as "elliptical with a low perigee" and it is still unclear what kind of damage the debris would cause if it collided with the ISS. "Tracking of the small piece of debris/MMOD (Micrometeoroid Orbital Debris) was initially classed as a low threat of collision with the ISS.
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Original: In memos published by NASAspaceflight.com, the object is described as "elliptical with a low perigee" and it is still unclear what kind of damage the debris would cause if it collided with the ISS. "Tracking of the small piece of debris/MMOD (Micrometeoroid Orbital Debris) was initially classed as a low threat of collision with the ISS.
Revised: In memos published by NASAspaceflight.com, the object is described as "elliptical with a low perigee" . It was unclear what kind of damage the debris would cause if it collided with the ISS. "Tracking of the small piece of debris/MMOD (Micrometeoroid Orbital Debris) was initially classed as a low threat of collision with the ISS.
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Original: In memos published by NASAspaceflight.com, the object is described as "elliptical with a low perigee" and it is still unclear what kind of damage the debris would cause if it collided with the ISS. "Tracking of the small piece of debris/MMOD (Micrometeoroid Orbital Debris) was initially classed as a low threat of collision with the ISS.
Revised: In memos published by NASAspaceflight.com, the object is described as "elliptical with a low perigee" and it is still unclear what kind of damage the debris would have caused if it had collided with the ISS. "Tracking of the small piece of debris/MMOD (Micrometeoroid Orbital Debris) was initially classed as a low threat of collision with the ISS.
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Original:  Universe Today reports the object as being large, while BNOnews says the object is small, 0.009 meters.
Revised:  Universe Today reported the object as being large, while BNOnews says the object is small, 0.009 meters.
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Original:  Universe Today reports the object as being large, while BNOnews says the object is small, 0.009 meters.
Revised:  Universe Today reports the object as being large, while BNOnews said the object was small, about 0.009 meters.
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Original:  At 12:34 EDT, " As a contingency, NASA’s Expedition 18 Commander Mike Fincke, Russian Flight Engineer Yury Lonchakov, and NASA’s Sandra Magnus may be asked to "evacuate" into the Russian Soyuz, which would serve as their means of departing from the Station - should it be required," added NASA.
Revised:  At 12:34 EDT, " as a contingency, NASA’s Expedition 18 Commander Mike Fincke, Russian Flight Engineer Yury Lonchakov, and NASA’s Sandra Magnus may be asked to "evacuate" into the Russian Soyuz, which would serve as their means of departing from the Station - should it be required," added NASA.
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Original:  At 12:34 EDT, " As a contingency, NASA’s Expedition 18 Commander Mike Fincke, Russian Flight Engineer Yury Lonchakov, and NASA’s Sandra Magnus may be asked to "evacuate" into the Russian Soyuz, which would serve as their means of departing from the Station - should it be required," added NASA.
Revised:  At 12:34 EDT, " As a contingency, NASA’s Expedition 18 Commander Mike Fincke, Russian Flight Engineer Yury Lonchakov, and NASA’s Sandra Magnus were asked to 'evacuate' into the Russian Soyuz, which would serve as their means of departing from the Station - should it be required," added NASA.
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Original:  “Bail is revoked. ”
Revised:  “Bail is revoked. 
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Original:  He could be sentenced for up to 150 years in gaol .
Revised:  He could be sentenced for up to 150 years in jail .
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Original: Among the charges that Madoff pled guilty to were four counts of fraud, three counts of money laundering, perjury, and making false statements, among others.
Revised: Among the charges that Madoff plead guilty to were four counts of fraud, three counts of money laundering, perjury, and making false statements, among others.
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Original:  “ He has incentive to flee, he has the means to flee, and thus he presents the risk of flight, ” the judge said.
Revised:  " He has incentive to flee, he has the means to flee, and thus he presents the risk of flight, ” the judge said.
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Original:  “ He has incentive to flee, he has the means to flee, and thus he presents the risk of flight, ” the judge said.
Revised:  “ He has incentive to flee, he has the means to flee, and thus he presents the risk of flight, " the judge said.
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Original:  “ Bail is revoked.
Revised:  " Bail is revoked.
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Original:  He could be sentenced for up to 150 years in jail.
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Original:  The fuel/oil heat exchanger is a dual purpose part designed to simultaneously melt fuel ice and cool down engine oil   .
Revised:  The fuel/oil heat exchanger is a dual purpose part designed to simultaneously melt fuel ice and cool down engine oil . .
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Original: Both events occured on Boeing 777-200ER airplanes powered by Rolls-Royce RB211 Trent 800 Series engines.
Revised: Both events occurred on Boeing 777-200ER airplanes powered by Rolls-Royce RB211 Trent 800 Series engines.
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Original:  Boeing has already developed new procedures after the crash to prevent ice from building up within their 777 fuel systems after it became aparant that icing may have been a factor, and it was some of these that the Delta flight crew had followed.
Revised:  Boeing has already developed new procedures after the crash to prevent ice from building up within their 777 fuel systems after it became apparent that icing may have been a factor, and it was some of these that the Delta flight crew had followed.
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Original:  As part of the recent releases by the NTSB and AAIB it has become apparant that investgators from both bodies, which are collaborating, have found ice buildup in the fuel system caused both rollbacks.
Revised:  As part of the recent releases by the NTSB and AAIB it has become apparant that investigators from both bodies, which are collaborating, have found ice buildup in the fuel system caused both rollbacks.
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Original:  This does not occure when fuel demand is lower, as the hot oil then becomes sufficient to entirely melt the ice.
Revised:  This does not occur when fuel demand is lower, as the hot oil then becomes sufficient to entirely melt the ice.
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Original:  The AAIB advised Boeing and Rolls-Royce to jointly review the problem accross the fuel system, and both companies responded that they 'accepted' this recommendation and repeated that a replacement part was being developed.
Revised:  The AAIB advised Boeing and Rolls-Royce to jointly review the problem across the fuel system, and both companies responded that they 'accepted' this recommendation and repeated that a replacement part was being developed.
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Original:  The AAIB further noted that it is unclear wether other aircraft designs are at risk, and advised the FAA and EASA to look into increased use of de-icing additives and investigate both the accumulation and sudden movement of ice in aircraft fuel systems and the actual formation of ice in the fuel itself.
Revised:  The AAIB further noted that it is unclear weather other aircraft designs are at risk, and advised the FAA and EASA to look into increased use of de-icing additives and investigate both the accumulation and sudden movement of ice in aircraft fuel systems and the actual formation of ice in the fuel itself.
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Original: According to a government report released on Tuesday, six inmates of a Saskatoon , Saskatchewan gaol managed to escape last summer after spending four months using nail clippers and other makeshift instruments to break out.
Revised: According to a government report released on Tuesday, six inmates of a Saskatoon gaol managed to escape last summer after spending four months using nail clippers and other makeshift instruments to break out.
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Original:  Some of the inmates played cards at a table in the corridor to block the guards' view.
Revised:  Some of the prisoners played cards at a table in the corridor to block the guards' view.
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Original:  The inmates used sheets and blankets to climb up the exterior walls of the compound,
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Original:  The report stated that no less than 87 prison guards had supervised the inmates' unit, but did not discover the prisoners' escape plans.
Revised:  The report stated that no fewer than 87 prison guards had supervised the inmates' unit, but did not discover the prisoners' escape plans.
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Original: Wall Street had it's best finish since November 2008 after a four day rally with the stock market’s indexes seeing their best weekly gain in nearly 5 months.
Revised: Wall Street had it's best finish since November 2008 after a four day rally with the stock market’s indexes seeing their best weekly gain in nearly five months.
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Original:  In the U.S stock market today financial sector had a mixed day , Drugmakers pushed the rally Helped by others like General Motors and Berkshire Hathaway  .
Revised:  Today was a mixed day , Drugmakers pushed the rally Helped by others like General Motors and Berkshire Hathaway .
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Original:  In the U.S stock market today financial sector had a mixed day , Drugmakers pushed the rally Helped by others like General Motors and Berkshire Hathaway  .
Revised:  In the U.S stock market today financial sector had a mixed day for the financial sector, Drug makers had some gains and so did General Motors and Berkshire Hathaway .
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Original:  There was more good news from Bank of America Corp. and JPMorgan Chase & Co., who announced that they have had profits in the current year so far .
Revised:  There was more good news from Bank of America Corp. and JPMorgan Chase & Co., who announced that they have had profits in the current year .
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Original:  The value of the US dollar fell against the other world currencies, but gold prices increased
Revised:  The value of the US dollar fell against other world currencies, but gold prices increased
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Original: Image:Photos NewYork1 032.jpg|Elaborate marble facade of New York Stock Exchange as seen from the intersection of Broad and Wall Streets]] Wall Street had it's best finish since November 2008 after a four day rally with the stock market’s indexes seeing their best weekly gain in nearly five months.
Revised: Image:Photos NewYork1 032.jpg|Elaborate marble facade of New York Stock Exchange as seen from the intersection of Broad and Wall Streets]] Wall Street had its best finish since November 2008 after a four day rally with the stock market’s indexes seeing their best weekly gain in nearly five months.
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Original:  The S&P 500 Index finished at 756.55 a 6 point gain and the NASDAQ composite had a 5.40  gain as well to end the day at 1431.50.
Revised:  The S&P 500 Index finished at 756.55 a 6 point gain and the NASDAQ composite had a 5.40 point gain as well to end the day at 1431.50.
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Original:  The value of the US dollar fell against other world currencies, but gold prices increased  
Revised:  The value of the US dollar fell against other world currencies, but gold prices increased . 
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Original: Image:Photos NewYork1 032.jpg | Elaborate marble facade of New York Stock Exchange as seen from the intersection of Broad and Wall Streets Wall Street had its best finish since November 2008 after a four day rally with the stock market’s indexes seeing their best weekly gain in nearly five months.
Revised: Image:Photos NewYork1 032.jpg | Wall Street had its best finish since November 2008 after a four day rally with the stock market’s indexes seeing their best weekly gain in nearly five months.
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Original: Image:Photos NewYork1 032.jpg|The New York Stock Exchange as seen from the intersection of Broad and Wall Streets The rally began earlier this week after the news from Citigroup Inc. about managing profits during first two months of the year.
Revised:  The rally began earlier this week after the news from Citigroup Inc. about managing profits during first two months of the year.
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Original: The administration of United States President Barack Obama issued a court order Friday dropping "enemy combatant" as a term to describe those held in the U.S. military prison on Guantánamo Bay.
Revised: The administration of United States President Barack Obama issued a court order Friday dropping "enemy combatant" as a term to describe those held in the U.S. military prison in Guantánamo Bay.
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Original:  [[File:Guantanamo captives in January 2002.jpg|Captives from the U.S. military prison on Guantánamo Bay in January 2002.]] Although detainees have argued in lawsuits that only those directly involved in terrorist hostilities should be held, the Justice Department filing continues to assert Obama's authority to hold detainees even if they were not captured on the battlefield.
Revised:  [[File:Guantanamo captives in January 2002.jpg|Captives from the U.S. military prison in Guantánamo Bay in January 2002.]] Although detainees have argued in lawsuits that only those directly involved in terrorist hostilities should be held, the Justice Department filing continues to assert Obama's authority to hold detainees even if they were not captured on the battlefield.
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Original:  However, Obama say he will rely on that authority from Congress and international laws of war, not the wartime power gave him the authority that Bush claimed  .
Revised:  However, Obama say he will rely on that authority from Congress and international laws of war, not the wartime authority that Bush claimed .
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Original:  "As we work towards developing a new policy to govern detainees, it is essential that we operate in a manner that strengthens our national security, is consistent with our values and is governed by law," said Attorney General Eric Holder in a statement  
Revised:  "As we work towards developing a new policy to govern detainees, it is essential that we operate in a manner that strengthens our national security, is consistent with our values and is governed by law," said Attorney General Eric Holder in a statement . 
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Original: Billionaire philanthropist and former Chief of Protocol of the United States Leonore Annenberg, widow of the late publishing magnate Walter Annenberg, died Thursday, March 12, 2009, at Eisenhower Medical Center in Rancho Mirage, California.
Revised: Billionaire philanthropist and former Chief of Protocol of the United States Leonore Annenberg, widow of the late publishing magnate Walter Annenberg, died Thursday, at Eisenhower Medical Center in Rancho Mirage, California.
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Original:  Some of these may float, but it is believed that they may have sunk which then may cause algae blooms.
Revised:  Some of these may float, but it is believed that they may have sunk which then may cause algal blooms.
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Original: If the ammonium nitrate mixes with the heavy oil an explosion occur.
Revised: If the ammonium nitrate mixes with the heavy oil , an explosion could occur.
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Original:   31 containers with 620 tonnes of ammonium nitrate fertiliser flew overboard during the violent storm.
Revised:  In addition, 31 containers with 620 tonnes of ammonium nitrate fertiliser flew overboard during the violent storm.
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Original: A Vietnamese coal transport ship sank in the South China Sea Friday, March 13, 2009 killing three people on board, reported the Xinhua news agency.
Revised: A Vietnamese coal transport ship sank in the South China Sea on Friday killing three people on board, reported the Xinhua news agency.
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Original:  The ship sank 22 kilometers from the Fangcheng Port in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region .150px |map of China with the Guangxi autonnomous region highlighted The Nanhaijiu 196 rescue vessel was dispatched about 8 pm local time, when authorities were notified that the ship may sink.
Revised:  The ship sank 22 kilometers from the Fangcheng Port in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region . 150px |map of China with the Guangxi autonnomous region highlighted The Nanhaijiu 196 rescue vessel was dispatched about 8 pm local time, when authorities were notified that the ship may sink.
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