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Original:  while his son Michael J. Prest  a trained barrister (grandson of Arthur Prest), oil trader , foremost oil and gas mogul and philanthropist.
Revised:  while his son Michael J. Prest is a trained barrister (grandson of Arthur Prest), oil trader , foremost oil and gas mogul and philanthropist.
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Original: Correction of the records Chief Arthur Prest first daughter was late Mrs Doris Catherine Pritchard and Chief Arthur Prest had 18 children and not just 4 as mentioned above and they all deserve to be acknowledged.
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Original:  2019, at the age of 55, acting as a surrogate mother for her 31-year-old daughter Tracey Smith, who was born without a womb, and her husband Adam URL 55 years, 3 days 1936 Her husband Natural conception United Kingdom Winifred Wilson, from Eccles, west of Manchester, England, who gave birth to her 10th child at the age of 55 years and 3 days in 1936, was the oldest British mother until September 1987, when Kathleen Campbell, from Nottingham, England, gave birth at 55 years and 141 days.
Revised:  2019, at the age of 55, acting as a surrogate mother for her 31-year-old daughter Tracey Smith, who was born without a womb, and her husband Adam Smith. 55 years, 3 days 1936 Her husband Natural conception United Kingdom Winifred Wilson, from Eccles, west of Manchester, England, who gave birth to her 10th child at the age of 55 years and 3 days in 1936, was the oldest British mother until September 1987, when Kathleen Campbell, from Nottingham, England, gave birth at 55 years and 141 days.
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Original:  57 years July 2008 Her husband Natural conception Ukraine 57-year-old woman gave birth to a son, Andrei, in Kiev , Ukraine by Caesarean section on June 13, 2008, at the age of 57.
Revised:  57 years July 2008 Her husband Natural conception Ukraine 57-year-old woman gave birth to a son, Andrei, in Kyiv , Ukraine by Caesarean section on June 13, 2008, at the age of 57.
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Original:  In science fiction media escapism is often depicted as an extension of social evolution, as society becomes detached from physical reality and processing into a virtual one, examples include the virtual world of Oz in the 2009 Japanese animated science fiction anime Summer Wars and the game "Society" in the 2009 American science fiction film Gamer, a play on the real-life MMO game Second Life.
Revised:  In science fiction media escapism is often depicted as an extension of social evolution, as society becomes detached from physical reality and processing into a virtual one, examples include the virtual world of Oz in the 2009 Japanese animated science fiction film Summer Wars and the game "Society" in the 2009 American science fiction film Gamer, a play on the real-life MMO game Second Life.
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Original:  A caricature portrays him as  Lohengrin.]]
Revised:  A caricature portrays him as King Lohengrin.]]
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Original: References in Usage Kratochwil, Anselm.
Revised: References Kratochwil, Anselm.
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Original:  But the geotope is properly the rocks and not the whole lay of the land (which would be the physiotope). you need to find something about geothroem
Revised:  But the geotope is properly the rocks and not the whole lay of the land (which would be the physiotope). 
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Original:  Example geotopes might be : an exposed outcrop of rocks, an erratic boulder, a grotto or ravine, a cave, an old stone wall marking a property boundary, and so forth.
Revised:  Example geotopes might be an exposed outcrop of rocks, an erratic boulder, a grotto or ravine, a cave, an old stone wall marking a property boundary, and so forth.
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Original: File:Grube Gotthold Hohenleipisch 2013 1be ausschnitt.jpg|Petrified Miocene quartz sand in the old Grube Gotthold mine on the Liebenwerda Heath, Lower Lusatia]] Geotope is the geological component of the abiotic matrix present in an ecotope.
Revised: File:Grube Gotthold Hohenleipisch 2013 1be ausschnitt.jpg|Petrified Miocene quartz sand in the old Grube Gotthold mine on the Liebenwerda Heath, Lower Lusatia]] A geotope is the geological component of the abiotic matrix present in an ecotope.
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Original: Legacy When Mahatma Gandhi started seeking help for establishment of Jamia Millia Islamia, then Devdas also came forward on the call of Gandhi.
Revised: Legacy When Mahatma Gandhi started seeking help for establishment of Jamia Millia Islamia, Devdas also came forward on the call of Gandhi.
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Original:  He started teaching Hindi there and also the cotton spinning - “Devdas is teaching cotton spinning etc at Jamia Millia." .
Revised:  He started teaching Hindi there and also the cotton spinning .
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Original:  He also became a prominent journalist, serving as editor of Hindustan Times.
Revised:  Due to his father M K Gandhi's proximity with industrialist Birla family he became editor of Hindustan Times.
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Original: Politics In 2004, Jay filed his candidacy for Philippine Senator under the Aksyon Demokratiko political party of Education secretary Raul Roco.
Revised: Political career In 2004, Jay filed his candidacy for Philippine Senator under the Aksyon Demokratiko political party of Education secretary Raul Roco.
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Original: He helped found the Sudan Democratic Forum, a think tank of Sudanese intellectuals working for the advancement of democracy in Sudan  as well as co-founding the Darfur Peace and Development Organization to raise awareness about the crisis in his troubled region.
Revised: He helped found the Sudan Democratic Forum, a think tank of Sudanese intellectuals working for the advancement of democracy in Sudan , as well as co-founding the Darfur Peace and Development Organization to raise awareness about the crisis in his troubled region.
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Original: Omer Ismail is a humanitarian and activist working to publicize conditions in Dafur .
Revised: Omer Ismail is a humanitarian and activist working to publicize conditions in Darfur .
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Original:  He has subsequently worked for the United Nations, and was a Policy Fellow at the Kennedy School of Government in the Carr Centre for Human Rights Policy, Harvard University in 2006/2007."Past Carr Center Fellows"
Revised:  He subsequently worked for the United Nations, and was a Policy Fellow at the Kennedy School of Government in the Carr Centre for Human Rights Policy, Harvard University in 2006/2007."Past Carr Center Fellows"
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Original:  He was forced to flee Sudan in 1989 following after the National Islamic Front took power in 1989.
Revised:  He was forced to flee Sudan in 1989 after the National Islamic Front took power in 1989.
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Original: Omer Gamar-Eldin Ismail  is Sudan’s Acting Minister of Foreign Affairs.
Revised: Omer Gamar-Eldin Ismail () is Sudan’s Acting Minister of Foreign Affairs.
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Original: Omer Gamar-Eldin Ismail () is Sudan’s Acting Minister of Foreign Affairs.
Revised: Omer Gamar-Eldin Ismail () was Sudan’s Acting Minister of Foreign Affairs.
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Original:  Her father was a full-blood Coeur d'Alene, and her mother was of Kootenay, Cree and Irish URL In a sparse style that has been compared to URL Hale's work often explores issues of Native American identity and discusses poverty, abuse, and the condition of women in society.
Revised:  Her father was a full-blood Coeur d'Alene, and her mother was of Kootenay, Cree and Irish descent. In a sparse style that has been compared to URL Hale's work often explores issues of Native American identity and discusses poverty, abuse, and the condition of women in society.
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Original:  She also wrote The Owl's Song (1974), The Jailing of Cecelia Capture (which was nominated for the Pulitzer Prize in 1985), Women on the Run (1999), and Custer Lives in Humboldt County & Other Poems URL Janet Campbell Hale has taught at Northwest Indian URL Iowa State University, College of Illinois, and University of California at Santa URL and has served as resident writer at University of Oregon and University of URL Hale currently lives on the Coeur d'Alene Reservation in De Smet, Idaho.
Revised:  She also wrote The Owl's Song (1974), The Jailing of Cecelia Capture (which was nominated for the Pulitzer Prize in 1985), Women on the Run (1999), and Custer Lives in Humboldt County & Other Poems URL Janet Campbell Hale has taught at Northwest Indian College, Iowa State University, College of Illinois, and University of California at Santa URL and has served as resident writer at University of Oregon and University of URL Hale currently lives on the Coeur d'Alene Reservation in De Smet, Idaho.
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Original:  She also wrote The Owl's Song (1974), The Jailing of Cecelia Capture (which was nominated for the Pulitzer Prize in 1985), Women on the Run (1999), and Custer Lives in Humboldt County & Other Poems URL Janet Campbell Hale has taught at Northwest Indian URL Iowa State University, College of Illinois, and University of California at Santa URL and has served as resident writer at University of Oregon and University of URL Hale currently lives on the Coeur d'Alene Reservation in De Smet, Idaho.
Revised:  She also wrote The Owl's Song (1974), The Jailing of Cecelia Capture (which was nominated for the Pulitzer Prize in 1985), Women on the Run (1999), and Custer Lives in Humboldt County & Other Poems URL Janet Campbell Hale has taught at Northwest Indian URL Iowa State University, College of Illinois, and University of California at Santa Cruz, and has served as resident writer at University of Oregon and University of URL Hale currently lives on the Coeur d'Alene Reservation in De Smet, Idaho.
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Original:  She also wrote The Owl's Song (1974), The Jailing of Cecelia Capture (which was nominated for the Pulitzer Prize in 1985), Women on the Run (1999), and Custer Lives in Humboldt County & Other Poems URL Janet Campbell Hale has taught at Northwest Indian URL Iowa State University, College of Illinois, and University of California at Santa URL and has served as resident writer at University of Oregon and University of URL Hale currently lives on the Coeur d'Alene Reservation in De Smet, Idaho.
Revised:  She also wrote The Owl's Song (1974), The Jailing of Cecelia Capture (which was nominated for the Pulitzer Prize in 1985), Women on the Run (1999), and Custer Lives in Humboldt County & Other Poems URL Janet Campbell Hale has taught at Northwest Indian URL Iowa State University, College of Illinois, and University of California at Santa URL and has served as resident writer at University of Oregon and University of Washington. Hale currently lives on the Coeur d'Alene Reservation in De Smet, Idaho.
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Original:  Part of the dynamics of Bloodlines is to invert the white narratives about the capture of white people by Native Americans, into an account of capture of Native peoples by European-descended URL Escape and transformation of capture figure in several of her works.
Revised:  Part of the dynamics of Bloodlines is to invert the white narratives about the capture of white people by Native Americans, into an account of capture of Native peoples by European-descended people. Escape and transformation of capture figure in several of her works.
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Original:  while her siblings had been born on the reservation, a brother born the previous winter had only lived a few hours, so to avoid hazardous winter weather, the family temporarily relocated to Oceanside, California for Janet's birth and returned to northern Idaho in June, 1946.
Revised:  while her siblings had been born on the reservation, a brother born the previous winter had only lived a few hours, so to avoid hazardous winter weather, the family temporarily relocated to southern California for Janet's birth and returned to northern Idaho in June, 1946.
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Original: 20th-century Native Americans Category:21st-century Native Americans Category:American children's writers Category:American women children's writers Category:American Book Award winners Category:American people of Irish descent Category:Coeur d'Alene people Category:Cree people Category:Ktunaxa people Category:Native American children's writers Category:Native American women writers Category:People from Benewah County, Idaho Category:Writers from Idaho Category:Writers from Riverside, Californ
Revised: 20th-century Native Americans Category:21st-century Native Americans Category:American children's writers Category:American women children's writers Category:American Book Award winners Category:American people of Irish descent Category:Coeur d'Alene people Category:Cree people Category:Ktunaxa people Category:Native American children's writers Category:Native American women writers Category:People from Benewah County, Idaho Category:Writers from Idaho Category:Writers from Riverside, California Category:20th-century Native American wom
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Original: American women children's writers Category:American Book Award winners Category:American people of Irish descent Category:Coeur d'Alene people Category:Cree people Category:Ktunaxa people Category:Native American children's writers Category:Native American women writers Category:People from Benewah County, Idaho Category:Writers from Idaho Category:Writers from Riverside, California Category:20th-century Native American women Category:21st-century Native American wom
Revised: American women children's writers Category:American Book Award winners Category:American people of Irish descent Category:Coeur d'Alene people Category:Cree people Category:Ktunaxa people Category:Native American children's writers Category:Native American women writers Category:People from Benewah County, Idaho Category:Writers from Idaho Category:Writers from Riverside, California Category:20th-century Native American women Category:21st-century Native American women Category:Native American people from Californ
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Original:  According to a fraction of a Manichean source, a brother of the Sasanian king Shapur I (r. 240-270), Mihrshah, ruled as the vassal-king of Meshan - however, some scholars doubt this source.
Revised:  According to a fraction of a Manichean source, a brother of the Sasnian king Shapur I (r. 240-270), Mihrshah, ruled as the vassal-king of Meshan - however, some scholars doubt this source.
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Original: Net idols in Japanese popular culture In the anime and manga Sayonara Zetsubō Sensei.
Revised:  In the anime and manga Sayonara Zetsubō Sensei.
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Original:  Unlike an Internet celebrity , a net idol is more focused on Japanese pop culture .
Revised:  Unlike an Internet celebrity . It is a sub-category of the idol culture in Japanese pop entertainment .
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Original: History Net idols emerged as an offshoot of Japanese idols in the late 1990s.
Revised: History Net idols emerged in the late 1990s.
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Original:  Meanwhile, gravure idols (グラビアアイドル, gurabia aidoru) such as Yoko Matsugane, Rio Natsume and Eiko Koike, net idols themselves, have largely appeared skimpily clad in "cheesecake" photographs.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also List of net idols List of Japanese idols References
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Original:  These types of Fungi are found in the Dese
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Original:  Sexually reproducing ascomycetes, especially Chaetomium spp., have developed resilience by growing thick, dark perithecianiggers . Under desert shrubs, however, more sensitive species such as Gymnoascus reesii prevail.
Revised:  Sexually reproducing ascomycetes, especially Chaetomium spp., have developed resilience by growing thick, dark perithecia . Under desert shrubs, however, more sensitive species such as Gymnoascus reesii prevail.
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Original:  (2006) "Soil crust microfungi along as southward rainfall gradient in desert ecosystems. (.Y.) " Eur.
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Original:  These types of Fungi are found in the Deser 
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Original:  Producing large dark multicellular spores also helps survival.
Revised:  Producing large dark unicellular spores also helps survival.
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Original: A variety of terricolous fungi inhabit the biological soil crust of arid regions.
Revised: A variety of terricolous fungi inhabiting the biological soil crust of arid regions.
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Original:  Babylonian Life and History, by E. A. Wallis Budge Children Among the known sons of Naram-Sin were his successor Shar-Kali-Sharri, Nabi-Ulmash, who was governor of Tutub, and a Ukin-Ulmash.
Revised:  Children Among the known sons of Naram-Sin were his successor Shar-Kali-Sharri, Nabi-Ulmash, who was governor of Tutub, and a Ukin-Ulmash.
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Original:  Excavations at Tell Mozan (ancient Urkesh) brought to light a sealing of Tar'am-Agade, a previously unknown daughter of Naram-Sin, who was possibly married to an unidentified endan (ruler) of Urkesh   .
Revised:  Excavations at Tell Mozan (ancient Urkesh) brought to light a sealing of Tar'am-Agade, a previously unknown daughter of Naram-Sin, who was possibly married to an unidentified endan (ruler) of Urkesh . .
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Original:  He was also the first to date an archaeological artifact in his attempt to date Naram-Sin's temple during his search for it.
Revised:  He was also the first to date an archaeological artefact in his attempt to date Naram-Sin's temple during his search for it.
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Original:  Even though his estimate was inaccurate by about 1,500 years , it was still a very good one considering the lack of accurate dating technology at the time .
Revised:  His estimate was inaccurate by about 1,500 years , it was still a very good one considering the lack of accurate dating technology at the time .
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Original:  Even though his estimate was inaccurate by about 1,500 years , it was still a very good one considering the lack of accurate dating technology at the time .
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Original: Sadek Hadjeres is an Algerian communist born in 1928 in Larbaâ Nath Irathen, Algeria.
Revised: Sadek Hadjerès is an Algerian communist born in 1928 in Larbaâ Nath Irathen, Algeria.
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Original:  After the so called Berber crisis of 1949 within the PPA party, Hadjeres left having been involved in the crisis.
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Original:  In 1951 Sadek Hadjeres joined the Algerian Communist Party (Parti Communiste Algérien).
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Original:  Hadjeres joined the ORP while other communist leaders such as Henri Alleg and Larbi Bouhali exiled themselves which caused the downfall of the Algerian Communist Party (PCA) . With the leaders exiled, the ORP was weakened and the PAGS party was created the following year.
Revised:  Hadjeres joined the ORP while other communist leaders such as Henri Alleg and Larbi Bouhali went into exile . With the leaders exiled, the ORP was weakened and the PAGS party was created the following year.
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Original: After the so called Berber crisis of 1949 within the PPA party, Hadjerès left having been involved in the crisis.
Revised: After the so-called Berber crisis of 1949 within the PPA party, Hadjerès left having been involved in the crisis.
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Original: Biography He went to primary school in Berrouaghia and Larba, and secondary school in Medea , Blida and Ben Aknoun.
Revised: Biography He went to primary school in Berrouaghia and Larba, and secondary school in Médéa , Blida and Ben Aknoun.
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Original:  A Hybrid ROV (HROV) combines features of both ROVs and AUV, operating independently or with a cable. was employed in 1985 to locate the wreck of  ;
Revised:  A Hybrid ROV (HROV) combines features of both ROVs and AUV, operating independently or with a cable. was employed in 1985 to locate the wreck of the ;
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Original:     Scientific results In 1974, Alvin (operated by the Woods Hole Oceanographic Institution and the Deep Sea Place Research Center), the French bathyscaphe Archimède, and the French diving saucer CYANA, assisted by support ships and , explored the great rift valley of the Mid-Atlantic Ridge, southwest of the Azores.
Revised:  The processing of the chosen material for constructing submersible research vehicles guides much of the rest of the construction process. For example, the Japan Agency for Marine-Earth Science and Technology (JAMSTEC) employs several Autonomous Underwater Vehicles (AUVs) with varied construction. The most commonly used metals for constructing the high-pressure vessels of these craft are wrought alloys of aluminum, steel, and titanium. Aluminum is chosen for medium-depth operations where extremely high strength is not necessary. Steel is an extremely well-understood material which can be tuned to have incredible yield strength and yield stress. It is an excellent material for resisting the extreme pressures of the sea but has a very high density that limits the size of steel pressure vessels due to weight concerns. Titanium is nearly as strong as steel and three times as light. It seems like the obvious choice to use but has several issues of its own. Firstly, it is much more costly and difficult to work with titanium, and improper processing can lead to substantial flaws. To add features such as viewports to a pressure vessel, delicate machining operations must be used, which carry a risk in titanium. The Deepsea Challenger, for example, used a sphere of steel to house its pilot. This sphere is estimated to be able to withstand 23,100 psi of hydrostatic pressure, which is roughly equivalent to an ocean depth of 52,000 feet, far deeper than Challenger Deep. Smaller titanium spheres were used to house many of the vessel’s electronics, as the smaller size lowered the risk of catastrophic failure. Scientific results In 1974, Alvin (operated by the Woods Hole Oceanographic Institution and the Deep Sea Place Research Center), the French bathyscaphe Archimède, and the French diving saucer CYANA, assisted by support ships and , explored the great rift valley of the Mid-Atlantic Ridge, southwest of the Azores.
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Original:  The ocean depths still remain a largely unexplored part of the planet, and form a relatively undiscovered domain .
Revised:  The ocean depths still remain a largely unexplored part of the planet, and form a relatively undiscovered love .
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Original:  This is an eel trap that has been modified to better catch deep sea fauna .
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Original:  A pulse of sound sent from the ship is reflected from the sea bottom back to the ship, the interval of time between transmission and reception being proportional to the depth of the water.
Revised:  A pulse of sound sent from the ship is reflected from the sea bottom back to the ship, the interval of time between transmission and reception is proportional to the depth of the water.
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Original:  In addition, high-resolution television cameras, thermometers , pressure meters, and seismographs are other notable instruments for deep-sea exploration invented by the technological advance.
Revised:  In addition, high-resolution television cameras, sexs , pressure meters, and seismographs are other notable instruments for deep-sea exploration invented by the technological advance.
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