wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 47-9 In most of the territories, systems of land tenure included land recognised as belonging to their African peoples (native land) and under customary law, land alienated to non-natives as freehold or leasehold land, and a residual category of Crown land, capable of being declared native land or alienated , and including forests and game reserves.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 47-9 In most of the territories, systems of land tenure included land recognised as belonging to their African peoples (native land) and under customary law, land alienated to non-natives as freehold or leasehold land, and a residual category of Crown land, capable of being declared native land or alienated to Europeans. This last category included forests and game reserves.
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Original:  The commission suggested that land policy should evolve to promote individual ownership of agricultural land by Africans, that Crown land, where suitable for cultivation or pastoralism should be reserved for African use unless manifestly surplus to expected  requirements, and that African tenants on European owned-estates should be protected from exploitation.
Revised:  The commission suggested that land policy should evolve to promote individual ownership of agricultural land by Africans, that Crown land, where suitable for cultivation or pastoralism should be reserved for African use unless manifestly surplus to expected future requirements, and that African tenants on European owned-estates should be protected from exploitation.
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Original:  It suggested the strengthening of colonial agricultural departments and the promotion of suitable exportable crops in each territory  .
Revised:  It suggested that colonial agricultural departments and the promotion of suitable exportable crops in each territory .
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Original:  It suggested the strengthening of colonial agricultural departments and the promotion of suitable exportable crops in each territory  .
Revised:  It suggested the strengthening of colonial agricultural departments should be strengthened, and the production of suitable exportable crops in each territory .
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Original:  It suggested the strengthening of colonial agricultural departments and the promotion of suitable exportable crops in each territory  .
Revised:  It suggested the strengthening of colonial agricultural departments and the promotion of suitable exportable crops in each territory should be promoted .
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Original:  African education had, before the commission's visit, been left to the missionaries, and only a small proportion of pupils had been educated beyond a basic level.
Revised:  African education had, before the commission's visit, been left to the missionaries, and only a small proportion of pupils had been educated beyond an elementary level.
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 52, 53-5 Trade and commerce The commission accepted that trade and commerce was generally underdeveloped, more particularly in Nyasaland and Northern Rhodesia, where copper mining was only just starting.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 52, 53-5 Trade and commerce The commission accepted that trade and commerce was generally underdeveloped, more particularly in Nyasaland ,,and in and Northern Rhodesia where copper mining was only just starting.
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 63-7, 69 Other issues The report contained a section on the serious problems caused by the tsetse fly in many areas of East and Central Africa, and suggested that the territories should coordinate efforts to eliminate the flies or their carriers and to treat human sleeping sickness and animal trypanosomiasis  .
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 63-7, 69 Other issues The report contained a section on the serious problems caused by the tsetse fly in many areas of East and Central Africa, and suggested that the territories should coordinate efforts to eliminate the flies or their carriers and to treat human sleeping sickness and animal trypanosomiasis with a view to their eradication .
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 70-1, 78-80 It also considered the importance of promoting scientific research in many fields, including crop production, forestry, fisheries and animal husbandry %DIFDELCMD < ]] %%%  and suggested that much of this should be financed by the British Government  .
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 70-1, 78-80 It also considered the importance of promoting scientific research in many fields, including crop production, forestry, fisheries and animal husbandry %DIFDELCMD < ]] %%% , and suggested that much of this should be financed by the British Government .
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 81-2, 90-1 Nyasaland The report noted that production of cotton and tobacco, the two most important export crops, was declining as the land was continuously cultivated without fertilizer being applied, and the quality of both  was poor.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 81-2, 90-1 Nyasaland The report noted that production of cotton and tobacco, the two most important export crops, was declining as the land was continuously cultivated without fertilizer being applied, and the quality of both crops grown was poor.
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Original:  as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial membersOrmsby-Gore , Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132 Kenya The colonial administration had encouraged Europeans to settle as farmers in the colony since 1903, and numbers had increased significantly after the First World War , and a considerable proportion of the best agricultural land had been allocated to these settlers as medium-sized or large farms, and the bulk of export crops were grown on these  .
Revised:  as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial members.Ormsby-Gore , Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132 Kenya The colonial administration had encouraged Europeans to settle as farmers in the colony since 1903, and numbers had increased significantly after the First World War , and a considerable proportion of the best agricultural land had been allocated to these settlers as medium-sized or large farms, and the bulk of export crops were grown on these .
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Original:  as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial membersOrmsby-Gore , Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132 Kenya The colonial administration had encouraged Europeans to settle as farmers in the colony since 1903, and numbers had increased significantly after the First World War , and a considerable proportion of the best agricultural land had been allocated to these settlers as medium-sized or large farms, and the bulk of export crops were grown on these  .
Revised:  as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial membersOrmsby-Gore , Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132 Kenya The colonial administration had encouraged Europeans to settle as farmers in the colony since 1903, and numbers had increased significantly after the First World War . In consequence, a considerable proportion of the best agricultural land had been allocated to these settlers as medium-sized or large farms, and the bulk of export crops were grown on these .
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Original:  as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial membersOrmsby-Gore , Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132 Kenya The colonial administration had encouraged Europeans to settle as farmers in the colony since 1903, and numbers had increased significantly after the First World War , and a considerable proportion of the best agricultural land had been allocated to these settlers as medium-sized or large farms, and the bulk of export crops were grown on these  .
Revised:  as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial membersOrmsby-Gore , Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132 Kenya The colonial administration had encouraged Europeans to settle as farmers in the colony since 1903, and numbers had increased significantly after the First World War , and a considerable proportion of Kenya's best agricultural land had been allocated to these settlers as medium-sized or large farms, and the bulk of export crops were grown on these .
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Original:  as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial membersOrmsby-Gore , Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132 Kenya The colonial administration had encouraged Europeans to settle as farmers in the colony since 1903, and numbers had increased significantly after the First World War , and a considerable proportion of the best agricultural land had been allocated to these settlers as medium-sized or large farms, and the bulk of export crops were grown on these  .
Revised:  as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial membersOrmsby-Gore , Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132 Kenya The colonial administration had encouraged Europeans to settle as farmers in the colony since 1903, and numbers had increased significantly after the First World War , and a considerable proportion of the best agricultural land had been allocated to these settlers as medium-sized or large farms, and the bulk of export crops were grown on these farms .
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 154, 158 The extension of European agriculture was causing demands for African workers that competed with opportunities for these to cultivate their own land or to migrate to work in the towns.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 154, 158 The extension of European agriculture was causing demands for African workers that competed with opportunities for them to cultivate their own land or to migrate to work in the towns.
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Original: Wetherell (1979), pp. 214-5, 225 The Hilton Young Commission also accepted that African interests must be paramount, that African development must be the first priority of all the colonial administrations and that indigenous African communities should have enough land reserved for them to grow sufficient food and economic crops, which land should not be available to be alienated to non-Africans.
Revised: Wetherell (1979), pp. 214-5, 225 The Hilton Young Commission also accepted that African interests must be paramount, that African development must be the first priority of all the colonial administrations and that indigenous African communities should have enough land reserved for them to grow sufficient food and economic crops, and that this land should not be available to be alienated to non-Africans.
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Original:  This report advocated adapting teaching to the needs of the local communities by using vernacular languages as well as English and African teachers and establishing higher-level vocational and technical training.
Revised:  This report advocated adapting teaching to the needs of the local communities by using vernacular languages as well as English , training more African teachers and establishing higher-level vocational and technical training.
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Bishop of Liverpool, Church and others, pp 4-6 It also promoted the education of girls and young women and  establishment of a hierarchy of schools that would eventually include university-level institutions.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Bishop of Liverpool, Church and others, pp 4-6 It also promoted the education of girls and young women and the establishment of a hierarchy of schools that would eventually include university-level institutions.
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Original: Fenda Lawrence was an 18th century African slave trader who operated in the Saloum town of Kaur.
Revised: Fenda Lawrence was an 18th-century African slave trader who operated in the Saloum town of Kaur.
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Original:  Fulladu Publishers, Gambia 2007 - d. after 1780), was an African slave trader who operated in the Saloum town of Kaur.
Revised:  Fulladu Publishers, Gambia 2007 – after 1780), was an African slave trader who operated in the Saloum town of Kaur.
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Original: Before starting the performance, the dalang places the figures on the lid of the crate whil others are handed over to his two assistants.
Revised: Before starting the performance, the dalang places the figures on the lid of the crate and others are handed over to his two assistants.
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Original:  The oil lamp symbolically represents the sun, whil the music represents the element of fire, air, and water.
Revised:  The oil lamp symbolically represents the sun, while the music represents the element of fire, air, and water.
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Original:  Form a Javanese gunungan with closed porch and two large yakshas on the sides.
Revised:  a Javanese gunungan with closed porch and two large yakshas on the sides.
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Original:  Gunungan in wayang kulit [[File:Wayang_performance,_Yogyakarta_1141.jpg|The gunungan in this wayang performance in Yogyakarta served as props.
Revised:  [[File:Wayang_performance,_Yogyakarta_1141.jpg|The gunungan in this wayang performance in Yogyakarta served as props.
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Original:  Before starting the performance, the dalang places the figures on the lid of the crate and others are handed over to his two assistants.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Lombok [[File:ZP_05_Gunungan_00.jpg|A gunungan from a variation of wayang kulit of Lombok, with which the story of Serat Menak Sasak is told.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% [[File:ZP_05_Gunungan_00.jpg|A gunungan from a variation of wayang kulit of Lombok, with which the story of Serat Menak Sasak is told.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gunungan in wayang beber A wayang beber at the Mangkunegaran Palace in Surakarta.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A wayang beber at the Mangkunegaran Palace in Surakarta.
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Original:  The gunungan (Javanese "mountain" , "savory" ), also known as kayon or kayonan (from kayu, "wood" or "tree") in Bali, is a figure in the Indonesian theatrical performance of wayang e.g. wayang kulit, wayang klitik, and wayang golek.
Revised:  The gunungan (Javanese "mountain" ), also known as kayon or kayonan (from kayu, "wood" or "tree") in Bali, is a figure in the Indonesian theatrical performance of wayang e.g. wayang kulit, wayang klitik, and wayang golek.
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Original:  <>. What it means by ‘ the number of people neither grows nor declines ’ is that births plus in-migrants equal deaths plus out-migrants.
Revised:  <>. What it means by ' the number of people neither grows nor declines ’ is that births plus in-migrants equal deaths plus out-migrants.
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Original:  <>. What it means by ‘ the number of people neither grows nor declines ’ is that births plus in-migrants equal deaths plus out-migrants.
Revised:  <>. What it means by ‘ the number of people neither grows nor declines ' is that births plus in-migrants equal deaths plus out-migrants.
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Original:  Yale University was a stronghold of the ZPG activists who believed “ that a constantly increasing population is responsible for many of our problems: pollution, violence, loss of values and of individual privacy.
Revised:  Yale University was a stronghold of the ZPG activists who believed " that a constantly increasing population is responsible for many of our problems: pollution, violence, loss of values and of individual privacy.
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Original:  ” “ZPG – A New Movement Challenges the U.S. to Stop Growing”, LIFE magazine, April 27, 1970, page 12ff Founding fathers of the movement were Paul Ehrlich, author of The Population Bomb, Richard Bowers, a Connecticut lawyer, and Professor Charles Lee Remington.
Revised:  " “ZPG – A New Movement Challenges the U.S. to Stop Growing”, LIFE magazine, April 27, 1970, page 12ff Founding fathers of the movement were Paul Ehrlich, author of The Population Bomb, Richard Bowers, a Connecticut lawyer, and Professor Charles Lee Remington.
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Original:  Ehrlich stated: “ The mother of the year should be a sterilized woman with two adopted children.
Revised:  Ehrlich stated: " The mother of the year should be a sterilized woman with two adopted children.
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Original:  ” Conversely, with fertility below replacement, a large elderly generation eventually results (as in an aging “baby boom” );
Revised:  " Conversely, with fertility below replacement, a large elderly generation eventually results (as in an aging “baby boom” );
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Original:  ” Conversely, with fertility below replacement, a large elderly generation eventually results (as in an aging “baby boom” );
Revised:  ” Conversely, with fertility below replacement, a large elderly generation eventually results (as in an aging "baby boom" );
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Original:  but since that generation failed to replace itself during its fertile years, a subsequent “population bust” , or decrease in population, will occur when the older generation dies off.
Revised:  but since that generation failed to replace itself during its fertile years, a subsequent "population bust" , or decrease in population, will occur when the older generation dies off.
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Original:  Thornhill and Author Daniel Quinn argue that human population growth is a function of the human food supply and that human population growth can only be achieved by an expanded food supply to support the growing population.
Revised:  Thornhill and author Daniel Quinn argue that human population growth is a function of the human food supply and that human population growth can only be achieved by an expanded food supply to support the growing population.
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Original:  New York: Norton According to some, zero population growth, perhaps after stabilizing at some optimum population , is the ideal towards which countries and the whole world should aspire in the interests of accomplishing long-term environmental sustainability.
Revised:  New York: Norton This is related to the optimum population theory, where a certain population is the ideal towards which countries and the whole world should aspire in the interests of accomplishing long-term environmental sustainability.
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Original:  Homer was appointed on December 24, 1878, by Police Commissioner Henry Sturgis Russell.
Revised:  Homer was appointed on December 24, 1878, by Police Commissioner Henry S. Russell.
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Original:  In 2010, his historic role was rediscovered by police archivist Margaret Sullivan and Boston Police Officer Robert Anthony, the Departments historian Later that year, police and city officials arranged to have a headstone installed at his grave, Sgt Horatio J. Homer and his wife, Lydia, who, for the past 87 years rested in an unmarked grave and forgotten.
Revised:  In 2010, his historic role was rediscovered by police archivist Margaret Sullivan and Boston Police Officer Robert Anthony, the Department’s historian. Later that year, police and city officials arranged to have a headstone installed at his grave, Sgt Horatio J. Homer and his wife, Lydia, who, for the past 87 years rested in an unmarked grave and forgotten.
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Original:  A plaque in his honor hangs at the Area B-2 police precinct in Roxbury 
Revised:  A plaque in his honor hangs at the Area B-2 police precinct in Roxbury . ÈÈÈÈÈ
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Original:  She is reported to have a Masters in International Business, from Washington International University.
Revised:  She is reported to have a Master of International Business, from Washington International University.
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Original:  She attended Makerere University Business School (MUBS) . Later, she received postgraduate executive training from the Harvard Business School and from the Stanford Graduate School of Business, both in the United States of America.
Revised:  She attended Makerere University Business School (MUBS) and received postgraduate executive training from the Harvard Business School and from the Stanford Graduate School of Business, both in the United States of America.
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Original:  She attended Makerere University Business School (MUBS) . Later, she received postgraduate executive training from the Harvard Business School and from the Stanford Graduate School of Business, both in the United States of America.
Revised:  She attended Makerere University Business School (MUBS) . Later, she received postgraduate executive training from Harvard Business School and from the Stanford Graduate School of Business, both in the United States of America.
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Original:  She attended Makerere University Business School (MUBS) . Later, she received postgraduate executive training from the Harvard Business School and from the Stanford Graduate School of Business, both in the United States of America.
Revised:  She attended Makerere University Business School (MUBS) . Later, she received postgraduate executive training from the Harvard Business School and from Stanford Graduate School of Business, both in the United States of America.
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Original:  She attended Makerere University Business School (MUBS) . Later, she received postgraduate executive training from the Harvard Business School and from the Stanford Graduate School of Business, both in the United States of America.
Revised:  She attended Makerere University Business School (MUBS) . Later, she received postgraduate executive training from the Harvard Business School and from the Stanford Graduate School of Business, both in the U.S.
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Original:  Career She founded Victoria Seeds Limited in 2004, with the primary objective to provide quality seeds in adequate quantities to smallholder farmers, first domestically and then regionally.
Revised:  Career She founded Victoria Seeds Limited in 2004, with the primary objective of providing quality seeds to smallholder farmers, first domestically and then regionally.
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Original:  Her own company needed a financial guarantee from a USAID-funded project, in order to secure start-up funding.
Revised:  Her own company needed a financial guarantee from a USAID-funded project, which allowed her to secure start-up funding.
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Original:  Her company is affiliated with 900 rural farmers, the majority of whom are women.
Revised:  Victoria Seeds Limited is affiliated with 900 rural farmers, the majority of whom are women.
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Original:  Victoria Seeds markets nearly 100 varieties of seeds, through over 400 affiliated agro-dealer outlets.
Revised:  The company markets nearly 100 varieties of seeds, through over 400 affiliated agro-dealer outlets.
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Original:  As of 2013, Josephine Okot's company maintained three seed-processing facilities (a) the original facility in Gulu, Northern Uganda established in 2004 (b) the second facility located in the city of Masindi, in the Western Region of Uganda, commissioned in 2011 and (c) the new company headquarters and newest facility located in Kampala Industrial and Business Park, in Namanve, Kira Municipality, Wakiso District, commissioned in 2012.
Revised:  As of 2013, Victoria Seeds Limited maintained three seed-processing facilities (a) the original facility in Gulu, Northern Uganda established in 2004 (b) the second facility located in the city of Masindi, in the Western Region of Uganda, commissioned in 2011 and (c) the new company headquarters and newest facility located in Kampala Industrial and Business Park, in Namanve, Kira Municipality, Wakiso District, commissioned in 2012.
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