wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Nothing seemed like it was too much trouble, and for that I am indebted to them  
Revised:  Nothing seemed like it was too much trouble, and for that I am indebted to them ." 
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Original:  It's just a sheer drop and it's very dark 
Revised:  It's just a sheer drop and it's very dark .
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Original:  The 19 year-old went missing on March 13th after leaving a fancy dress party in the city centre.
Revised:  The 19 year-old went missing on March 13 after leaving a fancy dress party in the city centre.
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Original: Over 50 people have been injured this morning (April 7'th) when two trains collided headlong at the Bet-Yehoshua station, near the city of Netanya , on the railway from Tel Aviv to Haifa.
Revised: Over 50 people have been injured today when two trains collided headlong at the Bet-Yehoshua station, near the city of Netanya , on the railway from Tel Aviv to Haifa.
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Original: Over 50 people have been injured this morning (April 7'th) when two trains collided headlong at the Bet-Yehoshua station, near the city of Netanya , on the railway from Tel Aviv to Haifa.
Revised: Over 50 people have been injured this morning (April 7'th) when two trains collided head-on at the Bet-Yehoshua station, near the city of Netanya , on the railway from Tel Aviv to Haifa.
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Original: Over 50 people have been injured this morning (April 7'th) when two trains collided headlong at the Bet-Yehoshua station, near the city of Netanya , on the railway from Tel Aviv to Haifa.
Revised: Over 50 people have been injured this morning (April 7'th) when two trains collided headlong at the Bet-Yehoshua station, near the city of Netanya on the railway from Tel Aviv to Haifa.
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Original:  From wikitionary (emphasis added) casualty (plural casualties)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1.(obsolete) Chance nature;
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1.(obsolete) Chance nature;
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Original:  randomness. quotations ▼%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1621, Robert Burton, The Anatomy of Melancholy, NYRB 2001, vol. 1 p. 327-8: The non-necessary causes%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% follow;
Revised:  randomness. %DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1621, Robert Burton, The Anatomy of Melancholy, NYRB 2001, vol. 1 p. 327-8: The non-necessary causes%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% follow;
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Original:  randomness. quotations ▼%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1621, Robert Burton, The Anatomy of Melancholy, NYRB 2001, vol. 1 p. 327-8: The non-necessary causes%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% follow;
Revised:  randomness. quotations ▼%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% causes%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% follow;
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Original:  randomness. quotations ▼%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1621, Robert Burton, The Anatomy of Melancholy, NYRB 2001, vol. 1 p. 327-8: The non-necessary causes%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% follow;
Revised:  randomness. quotations ▼%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1621, Robert Burton, The Anatomy of Melancholy, NYRB 2001, vol. 1 p. 327-8: The non-necessary %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% follow;
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Original:  of which, saith Fuchsius, no art can be made, by reason of their uncertainty, casualty, and multitude ...
Revised:  of which, saith Fuchsius, no art can be made, by reason of their uncertainty, casualty, and multitude 
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Original:  It is unclear whether the originally planned Australian tour dates can be kept, and sources indicate that the airliner's first stop in Brisbane, on November 11, may be eliminated in favour of a brief appearance on November 16
Revised:  It is unclear whether the originally planned Australian tour dates can be kept, and sources indicate that the airliner's first stop in Brisbane, on November 11, maybe eliminated in favour of a brief appearance on November 16
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Original:  It hopes , that it will also be able to benefit from the innovations of others.
Revised:  It hopes that it will also be able to benefit from the innovations of others.
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Original: Facebook recently announced that it will begin to share the technology that powers its massive online social network.
Revised: announced Thursday that it will begin to share the technology that powers its massive online social network.
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Original: Facebook recently announced that it will begin to share the technology that powers its massive online social network.
Revised: Facebook recently announced that it will begin to share some of the technology from their social network.
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Original:  The company has indicated it wants to share the specifications and design documents to help startups and to support innovation.
Revised:  The company indicated it woud like to share specifications and design documents to help startups and to support innovation.
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Original:  It hopes that it will also be able to benefit from the innovations of others.
Revised:  Facebook hopes that they will be able to benefit from the innovations of others.
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Original:  Mark Zuckerberg , Facebook's CEO, announced the company's "Open Compute Project" at an event held for reporters at the company's headquarters in  Palo Alto, California on Thursday  .
Revised:  , Facebook's CEO, announced the company's "Open Compute Project" at an event held for reporters at the company's headquarters in Palo Alto, California on Thursday .
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Original:  Mark Zuckerberg , Facebook's CEO, announced the company's "Open Compute Project" at an event held for reporters at the company's headquarters in  Palo Alto, California on Thursday  .
Revised:  Mark Zuckerberg , Facebook's CEO, announced the company's "Open Compute Project" at an event held for reporters at the company's headquarters in w| Palo Alto, California on Thursday .
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Original:  Mark Zuckerberg , Facebook's CEO, announced the company's "Open Compute Project" at an event held for reporters at the company's headquarters in  Palo Alto, California on Thursday  .
Revised:  Mark Zuckerberg , Facebook's CEO, announced the company's "Open Compute Project" at an event held for reporters at the company's headquarters in Palo Alto, California |Palo Alto .
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Original:  Facebook won’t directly make any money from the new project.
Revised:  Facebook will not directly make any money from the new project.
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Original:  The company can then incorporate those advances into its own servers.
Revised:  They can then incorporate those advances into its own servers.
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Original:  The company can then incorporate those advances into its own servers.
Revised:  The company can then incorporate those advances into their own servers.
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Original:  Anything that can make Facebook's servers run more efficiently , provides a major benefit for the company.
Revised:  Anything that can make Facebook's servers run more efficiently provides a major benefit for the company.
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Original:  Facebook says it already working with manufacturers, including Dell , that are manufacturing servers based on its designs.
Revised:  Facebook says it already working with manufacturers, including , that are manufacturing servers based on its designs.
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Original: Facebook says it  already working with manufacturers, including , that are manufacturing servers based on its designs.
Revised: Facebook says it is already working with manufacturers, including , that are manufacturing servers based on its designs.
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Original:  $75,000 of frozen bull semen was stolen from a Frederick County farmlast Sunday.
Revised: Authorities are looking for $75,000 of frozen bull semen was stolen from a Frederick County farmlast Sunday.
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Original:  $75,000 of frozen bull semen was stolen from a Frederick County farmlast Sunday.
Revised:  $75,000 in frozen bull semen was stolen from a Frederick County farmlast Sunday.
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Original:  The farmer says he   will give a fat reward to the person who returns the semen that was stolen from his tank .
Revised:  The farmer says he "I will give a fat reward to the person who returns the semen that was stolen from his tank .
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Original: Authorities are looking for $75,000 in frozen bull semen stolen Sunday from liquid nitrogen tanks at Eric Fleming's farm in Frederick County, Maryland.
Revised: Authorities are looking for $75,000 in frozen bull semen stolen Sunday from liquid nitrogen tanks at a farm in Frederick County, Maryland.
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Original:  Fleming says the semen took 4 to 5 years to collect from 40 to 50 bulls.
Revised:  Eric Fleming, the owner, says the semen took 4 to 5 years to collect from 40 to 50 bulls.
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Original:  "It was a mother load of semen," he said
Revised:  "It was a mother lode of semen," he said
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Original: Authorities are looking for  $75,000 in frozen bull semen stolen Sunday from liquid nitrogen tanks at a farm in Frederick County, Maryland.
Revised: Authorities are looking for USD $75,000 in frozen bull semen stolen Sunday from liquid nitrogen tanks at a farm in Frederick County, Maryland.
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Original:  "It was a mother lode of semen ," he said
Revised:  "It was a mother lode of semen .
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Original: The collection and storage of semen can be a very profitable business—the ease of transportation reduces the costs normally associated with insemmination , namely the transport of bull and cow to one another.
Revised: The collection and storage of semen can be a very profitable business—the ease of transportation reduces the costs normally associated with insemination , namely the transport of bull and cow to one another.
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Original:  "It was a mother lode of semen.
Revised:  "It was a mother load of semen.
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Original:  The Northern Bank heist is one of the largest in Europe since the theft of more than US$ 65 million from a London bank in 1987 
Revised:  The Northern Bank heist is one of the largest in Europe since the theft of more than US$ 65 million from a London bank in 1987. 
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Original: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release 17 security bulletins, known as patches , to address 64 security flaws on Tuesday, April 12.
Revised: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release 17 security bulletins, known as , to address 64 security flaws on Tuesday, April 12.
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Original: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release 17 security bulletins, known as patches , to address 64 security flaws on Tuesday, April 12.
Revised: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release 17 security bulletins, known as patches , to address 64 on Tuesday, April 12.
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Original:  Microsoft also released 17 security bulletins in December, but they addressed 40 flaws, only two being rated as critical;
Revised:  The company also released 17 security bulletins in December, but they addressed 40 flaws, only two being rated as critical;
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Original:  Microsoft also released 17 security bulletins in December, but they addressed 40 flaws, only two being rated as critical;
Revised:  Microsoft also released 17 security bulletins in December, but these addressed 40 flaws, only two being rated as critical;
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Original:  also a record is the number of flaws being addressed by Microsoft, the most previously addressed was 49 in the t2010 update, reports Jason Miller of the Israel-based Shavlik Technologies .
Revised:  also a record is the number of flaws being addressed by Microsoft, the most previously addressed was 49 in the t2010 update, reports Jason Miller of .
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Original:  Although Microsoft did not provide details, Microsoft said the update will address a browser bug, discovered in February, that potentially could allow the execution of code on remote systems, and the Windows flaw which has allowed client-side scripts to be run by an attacker in "limited, targeted attacks" Microsoft has said.
Revised:  Although Microsoft did not provide details, Microsoft said the update will address a browser bug, discovered in February, that potentially could allow the execution of code on outside systems, and the Windows flaw which has allowed client-side scripts to be run by an attacker in "limited, targeted attacks" Microsoft has said.
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Original:  "This is a huge update and system administrators should plan for deployment as all windows systems including Server 2008 and Windows 7 are affected by critical bulletins ," said Amol Sarwate, manager ofthe Vulnerability Research Lab at Qualys.
Revised:  "This is a huge update and system administrators should plan for deployment ," said Amol Sarwate, manager ofthe Vulnerability Research Lab at Qualys.
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Original: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release 17 security bulletins, known as , to address 64 on Tuesday , April 12.
Revised: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release 17 security bulletins, known as , to address 64 on Tuesday .
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Original:  The massive number of security flaws addressed in the April Patch update is a record for Microsoft.
Revised:  The enormous number of security flaws addressed in the April Patch update is a record for Microsoft.
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Original:  also a record is the number of flaws being addressed by Microsoft, the most previously addressed was 49 in the October 2010 update, reports Jason Miller of .
Revised:  also a record is the number of flaws being addressed in the update; the most previously addressed was 49 in the October 2010 update, reports Jason Miller of .
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Original:  It also covers various other applications.
Revised:  It also covers some other applications.
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Original: The April update covers security vulnerabilities in Windows 7, Windows Vista, Windows XP and various Windows Server editions, as well as versions of Office applications, Visual Studio, .
Revised: The April update covers security vulnerabilities in 7, Windows Vista, Windows XP and various Windows Server editions, as well as versions of Office applications, Visual Studio, .
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Original: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release 17 security bulletins, known as , to address 64 on Tuesday.
Revised: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release seventeen security bulletins, known as , to address 64 on Tuesday.
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Original:  Nine of the patches are deemed "critical" and eight as "important ".
Revised:  Nine of the patches are deemed "critical" and eight as "important ."
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Original:  The company also released 17 security bulletins in December, but these addressed 40 flaws, only two being rated as critical;
Revised:  The company also released seventeen security bulletins in December, but these addressed 40 flaws, only two being rated as critical;
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Original:  Although Microsoft did not provide details, Microsoft said the update will address a browser bug, discovered in February, that could potentially cause a denial-of-service attack, and the Windows flaw which has allowed client-side scripts to be run by an attacker in "limited, targeted attacks  " Microsoft has said.
Revised:  Although Microsoft did not provide details, Microsoft said the update will address a browser bug, discovered in February, that could potentially cause a denial-of-service attack, and the Windows flaw which has allowed client-side scripts to be run by an attacker in "limited, targeted attacks , " Microsoft has said.
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Original: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release seventeen security bulletins, known as , to address 64 on Tuesday.
Revised: Microsoft announced Thursday that it plans to release 17 security bulletins, known as , to address 64 on Tuesday.
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Original:  " In recent day
Revised:  In recent day
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Original:  A UN official said that Gbagbo forces "clearly used the lull of Tuesday as a trick to reinforce their position," and now control the Plateau and Cocody regions of Abidjan.
Revised:  A U.N. official said that Gbagbo forces "clearly used the lull of Tuesday as a trick to reinforce their position," and now control the Plateau and Cocody regions of Abidjan.
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Original:  After a brief lull in fighting  while it was reported that Gbagbo officials were negotiating a surrender, violence has resumed.
Revised:  After a brief lull in fighting , while it was reported that Gbagbo officials were negotiating a surrender, violence has resumed.
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Original:  After a brief lull in fighting  while it was reported that Gbagbo officials were negotiating a surrender, violence has resumed.
Revised:  After a brief lull in fighting while it was reported that Gbagbo officials were negotiating a surrender, violence resumed.
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Original:  The French ambassador's house has reportedly been fired upon , resulting in counter-attacks by French helicopters.
Revised:  The French ambassador's house was reportedly attacked , resulting in counter-attacks by French helicopters.
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Original:  The French ambassador's house has reportedly been fired upon , resulting in counter-attacks by French helicopters.
Revised:  The French ambassador's house has reportedly been fired upon , resulting in counter-strikes by French helicopters.
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Original:  He said that " t he Ivory Coast government believes France is looking for a pretext to resume bombings on the presidential palace .
Revised:  He said that " he Ivory Coast government believes France is looking for a pretext to resume bombings on the presidential palace .
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Original:  He said that " t he Ivory Coast government believes France is looking for a pretext to resume bombings on the presidential palace .
Revised:  He said that " t France is just looking for a pretext to resume bombings on the presidential palace .
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Original: Gbagbo forces are reportedly using heavy weaponry, including and , as well as tanks and armored troop transports.
Revised: Gbagbo forces are reportedly using heavy weaponry, including , as well as tanks and armored troop transports.
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Original:  He said that "France is just looking for a pretext to get rid of President Laurent Gbagbo.  
Revised:  He said that "France is just looking for a pretext to get rid of President Laurent Gbagbo. " 
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Original: Three babies have died and another 35 people, mostly young children  have become ill in city in Northwest .
Revised: Three babies have died and another 35 people, mostly young children , have become ill in city in Northwest .
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Original: Preliminary investigations have shown that the victims died from nitrate poisoning after drinking milk supplied from a local dairy farm.
Revised: Preliminary investigations have shown that the victims died from poisoning after drinking milk supplied from a local dairy farm.
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Original:  It remains unclear whether the poisoning was a crime or an accident, resulting from improper storage .
Revised:  It remains unclear whether the poisoning was a crime or an accident, resulting from improperly storing the milk .
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Original:  In March, the country’ s largest meat processor was forced to apologize after the illegal additive was found in  pork products.
Revised:  In March, China' s largest meat processor was forced to apologize after the illegal additive was found in pork products.
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Original:  In March, the country’ s largest meat processor was forced to apologize after the illegal additive was found in  pork products.
Revised:  In March, the country’ s largest meat processor apologized after the illegal additive was found in pork products.
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Original:  In March, the country’ s largest meat processor was forced to apologize after the illegal additive was found in  pork products.
Revised:  In March, the country’ s largest meat processor was forced to apologize after the illegal additive was found in some of their pork products.
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Original:  In 2008, six children died and nearly 300,000 became sick after consuming powdered infant milk laced with the chemical .
Revised:  In 2008, six children died and nearly 300,000 others were sickened after consuming powdered infant milk laced with the chemical .
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Original: Local police have detained a suspect in his 40’s who is believed to have produced and supplied the tainted milk.
Revised: According to , local police detained a suspect in his 40’s who is believed to have produced and supplied the tainted milk.
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Original:  Nitrate is usually used in dyes and to cure meats.
Revised:  Nitrite is usually used in dyes and to cure meats.
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Original: According to , local police detained a suspect in his 40’s who is believed to have produced and supplied the tainted milk.
Revised: According to , local police detained a suspect in his 40s who is believed to have produced and supplied the tainted milk.
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Original:  Most patients are children under 14.
Revised:  Most patients are children under fourteen years of age.
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Original: This week ’s state run newspapers in Bahrain officially declared that the nation was ‘back on track’ after weeks of political and sectarian unrest in the nation.
Revised: This week state run newspapers in Bahrain officially declared that the nation was ‘back on track’ after weeks of political and sectarian unrest in the nation.
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Original:  However the headlines are not what they seem . security forces have been raiding  protestors' homes, knocking their doors down, spraying graffiti on walls and arresting them in an effort to keep Shiite activists off the street. has been accused by the United States of human rights abuses including arbitrary detention and discrimination against majority of Shiites in the region, the United States government said yesterday.
Revised:  However the headlines are not what they seem . security forces have been raiding Shiite protestors' homes, knocking their doors down, spraying graffiti on walls and arresting them in an effort to keep Shiite activists off the street. has been accused by the United States of human rights abuses including arbitrary detention and discrimination against majority of Shiites in the region, the United States government said yesterday.
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Original:  However the headlines are not what they seem . security forces have been raiding  protestors' homes, knocking their doors down, spraying graffiti on walls and arresting them in an effort to keep Shiite activists off the street. has been accused by the United States of human rights abuses including arbitrary detention and discrimination against majority of Shiites in the region, the United States government said yesterday.
Revised:  However the headlines are not what they seem . security forces have been raiding protestors' homes, knocking their doors down, spraying graffiti on walls and arresting them in an effort to keep Shiite activists off the street. has been accused by the United States of human rights abuses including arbitrary detention and discrimination against Shiites in the region, the United States government said yesterday.
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Original:  “ We cannot stop, ” said one Shiite protestor who lost his teaching job because of his involvement in the protests, he told the AP, “We might pause to mourn the dead , but we will rise up again .”
Revised:  " We cannot stop, ” said one Shiite protestor who lost his teaching job because of his involvement in the protests, he told the AP, “We might pause to mourn the dead , but we will rise up again .”
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