wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  So I'm really happy  this medal give my voice more value, more strength  and I'll be able to impact even more, though on the 9th of September the Prime Minister's jury has rewarded me with the  Women Transforming India, I'm so happy that within three days of getting that award, I have added another medal to it and proved that yes this journey of ability beyond disability.
Revised:  So I'm really happy this medal give my voice more value, more strength and I'll be able to impact even more, though on the 9th of September the Prime Minister's jury has rewarded me with the award of Women Transforming India, I'm so happy that within three days of getting that award, I have added another medal to it and proved that yes this journey of ability beyond disability.
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Original:  So I'm really happy  this medal give my voice more value, more strength  and I'll be able to impact even more, though on the 9th of September the Prime Minister's jury has rewarded me with the  Women Transforming India, I'm so happy that within three days of getting that award, I have added another medal to it and proved that yes this journey of ability beyond disability.
Revised:  So I'm really happy this medal give my voice more value, more strength and I'll be able to impact even more, though on the 9th of September the Prime Minister's jury has rewarded me with the Women Transforming India, I'm so happy that within three days of getting that award, I have added another feather to it and proved that yes this journey of ability beyond disability.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  And not just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it ; age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability , is all a state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind . If you put your passion and hard work, you can get it and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it , and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it and in the Indian scenario were they say infrastructure is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously and psychologically, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [? increases because of the lack of infrastructure, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of lack of infrastructure, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it  and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure,  time to get rid of the excuses.
Revised:  No just disability, this is a universal message that if women put their minds to their dreams they can balance it , age, gender, disability is all state of mind , if you put your passion and hard work, you can get it and in the Indian scenario were they say disability is a challenge, women participation that are taboo, religiously , sociology, disabilities taken as a curse, dependability [ increases because of the lack of infrastructure, well, time to get rid of the excuses.
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Original:  We have to start erasing the excuses and believe  own self and that is the message I'm carrying with all the activities that I do whether it is car rallying, motorbiking or swimming (inaudible) , every record or every unique activity that I've undertaken and just below paralysis has been aimed at changing the stereotypical image of a women and  a women in disability.
Revised:  We have to start erasing the excuses and believe your own self and that is the message I'm carrying with all the activities that I do whether it is car rallying, motorbiking or swimming (inaudible) , every record or every unique activity that I've undertaken and just below paralysis has been aimed at changing the stereotypical image of a women and a women in disability.
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Original:  We have to start erasing the excuses and believe  own self and that is the message I'm carrying with all the activities that I do whether it is car rallying, motorbiking or swimming (inaudible) , every record or every unique activity that I've undertaken and just below paralysis has been aimed at changing the stereotypical image of a women and  a women in disability.
Revised:  We have to start erasing the excuses and believe own self and that 's the message I'm carrying with all the activities that I do whether it is car rallying, motorbiking or swimming (inaudible) , every record or every unique activity that I've undertaken and just below paralysis has been aimed at changing the stereotypical image of a women and a women in disability.
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Original:  We have to start erasing the excuses and believe  own self and that is the message I'm carrying with all the activities that I do whether it is car rallying, motorbiking or swimming (inaudible) , every record or every unique activity that I've undertaken and just below paralysis has been aimed at changing the stereotypical image of a women and  a women in disability.
Revised:  We have to start erasing the excuses and believe own self and that is the message I'm carrying with all the activities that I do whether it is car rallying, motorbiking or swimming (inaudible) , every record or every unique activity that I've undertaken and just below paralysis has been aimed at changing the stereotypical image of a women and also a women in disability.
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Original:  Will you and your daughter both be trying to represent India at the 2020 Games in Tokyo ? DM:
Revised:  Will you and your daughter both be trying to represent India at the 2020 Games in ? DM:
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Original:  Going to talk about myself but my daughter though she's Paralympian,
Revised:  I'm veryy sure about myself, but my daughter though she's Paralympian,
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Original:  Going to talk about myself but my daughter though she's Paralympian,
Revised:  Going to talk about myself but my daughter , though, she's Paralympian,
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Original:  yes, which  was considered a huge taboo in my society that oh my god both the mother and the daughter both have a physical disability,
Revised:  yes, which again was considered a huge taboo in my society that oh my god both the mother and the daughter both have a physical disability,
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Original:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially  and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
Revised:  what is going to happen to these two, but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
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Original:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially  and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
Revised:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
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Original:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially  and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
Revised:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the countries, for the Paralympics specially and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
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Original:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially  and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
Revised:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially , and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
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Original:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially  and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
Revised:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the , so I guess her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
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Original:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially  and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and powering, not just herself.
Revised:  what is going to happen with these two but we did good , and she is working as a youth council representative in the Commonwealth countries, for the Paralympics specially and her work though her foundation called Wheeling Happiness has earned her the young leader award from the Queen of England, so her focus is now shifting to more on community service and empowering others and not just herself.
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Original:  She is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough  going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
Revised:  And she is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
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Original:  She is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough  going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
Revised:  She is leaving on first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
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Original:  She is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough  going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
Revised:  She is leaving on the first of October to to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
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Original:  She is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough  going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
Revised:  She is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough is going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
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Original:  She is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough  going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
Revised:  She is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough going to give her a huge amount of sports [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
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Original:  She is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough  going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [ but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
Revised:  She is leaving on the first of October to Loughborough to do her PhD doctorate programme in disability sports psychology, I'm very sure Loughborough going to give her a huge amount of sports (inaudible) [inaudible but how much time she going to decide to devote to sports and studies is her decision in entirely , that her dream, her journey.
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