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Original: JPG|200px|Queen Elizabeth II </nowiki></nowiki></nowiki></nowiki></nowiki></nowiki></nowiki></nowiki></nowiki></nowiki></nowiki> Today marks the 80th birthday of Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II, whose reign has lasted over 54 years.
Revised: JPG|200px|Queen Elizabeth II Today marks the 80th birthday of Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II, whose reign has lasted over 54 years.
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Original:  The Associated Press reports via local reports that public facilities in the village of Tirichki near the seashore has been damaged and that transmission of electrical power has been affected 
Revised:  The Associated Press reports via local reports that public facilities in the village of Telichiki near the seashore has been damaged and that transmission of electrical power has been affected 
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Original:  CNN reports that the population of the village is 2, 000 
Revised:  CNN reports that the population of the village is 2, 000. 
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Original:  CNN reports that the population of the village is 2, 000. frame|none|Epicenter of the quak
Revised:  CNN reports that the population of the village is 2, frame|none|Epicenter of the quak
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Original:  CNN reports that the population of the village is 2, 000. frame|none|Epicenter of the quak
Revised:  CNN reports that the population of the village is 2, 000. 000
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Original:  According to the Japanese Meteorological Agency and the U.S. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Association, there was no danger of a  tsunami.
Revised:  According to the Japanese Meteorological Agency and the U.S. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Association, there was no danger of a w: tsunami.
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Original: The w: hypocenter of the quake was located at 61.092° N 167.100° E at a depth of 43 km.
Revised: The hypocenter of the quake was located at 61.092° N 167.100° E at a depth of 43 km.
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Original:  According to the Japanese Meteorological Agency and the U.S. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Association, there was no danger of a w: tsunami.
Revised:  According to the Japanese Meteorological Agency and the U.S. National Oceanic and Atmospheric Association, there was no danger of a tsunami.
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Original: Some 3300 buses belonging to BEST, Mumbai's public transport provider , will go off the roads indefinitely begining today as workers continue to strike over wages and working conditions.
Revised: Some 3300 buses belonging to BEST, Mumbai's public transport provider will go on strike indefinately. Workers are unhappy with changes made to wages and are concerned about their working conditions.
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Original:   At least 450,000 commuters are expected to be affected by the strike as nearly 3300 buses will be taken off the road.
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Original:  "I travel by bus everyday, but today because of the strike I have had to take an auto and its going to cost me Rs 200 just one way," said another commuter Janki Patel  
Revised:  "I travel by bus everyday, but today because of the strike I have had to take an auto and its going to cost me Rs 200 just one way," said another commuter Janki Patel . 
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Original: Although the Industrial Court said a strike is illegal, at least 45,000 employees of the BEST, Mumbai's public transport provider will go on strike indefinitely.
Revised: At least 45,000 employees of the BEST, Mumbai's public transport provider will go on strike indefinitely.
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Original:  Three days ago, they have again moved to the BHT committee asking them to freeze the dearness allowance which no worker is going to tolerate , " said Sharad Rao, General Secretary of BEST's workers union . "I travel by bus everyday, but today because of the strike I have had to take an auto and its going to cost me Rs 200 just one way," said another commuter Janki Patel .
Revised:  Three days ago, they have again moved to the BHT committee asking them to freeze the dearness allowance which no worker is going to tolerate " said Sharad Rao, General Secretary of BEST's workers union . "I travel by bus everyday, but today because of the strike I have had to take an auto and its going to cost me Rs 200 just one way," said another commuter Janki Patel .
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Original:  Three days ago, they have again moved to the BHT committee asking them to freeze the dearness allowance which no worker is going to tolerate , " said Sharad Rao, General Secretary of BEST's workers union . "I travel by bus everyday, but today because of the strike I have had to take an auto and its going to cost me Rs 200 just one way," said another commuter Janki Patel .
Revised:  Three days ago, they have again moved to the BHT committee asking them to freeze the dearness allowance which no worker is going to tolerate , " . "I travel by bus everyday, but today because of the strike I have had to take an auto and its going to cost me Rs 200 just one way," said another commuter Janki Patel .
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Original:  Three days ago, they have again moved to the BHT committee asking them to freeze the dearness allowance which no worker is going to tolerate , " said Sharad Rao, General Secretary of BEST's workers union . "I travel by bus everyday, but today because of the strike I have had to take an auto and its going to cost me Rs 200 just one way," said another commuter Janki Patel .
Revised:  Three days ago, they have again moved to the BHT committee asking them to freeze the dearness allowance which no worker is going to tolerate , " said Sharad Rao, General Secretary of BEST's workers union . "I travel by bus everyday, but today because of the strike I have had to take an auto and its going to cost me Rs 200 just one way," said another commuter Janki Patel 
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Original:  India's Industrial Court says diciplinary action will be taken against those who are on strike
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Original:  An Industrial Court has termed the strike call illegal and BEST has warned employees to participate in the strike, threatening with disciplinary action.
Revised:  An Industrial Court has termed the strike call illegal and BEST has warned its employees participating in the strike, threatening with disciplinary action.
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Original:  An Industrial Court has termed the strike call illegal and BEST has warned employees to participate in the strike, threatening with disciplinary action.
Revised:  An Industrial Court has termed the strike call illegal and BEST has warned employees to participate in the strike, that they would be faced with disciplinary action.
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Original: According to an Indian diplomat, King Gyanendra of Nepal, may turn the nation into a pro-democracy nation.
Revised: According to an Indian diplomat, King Gyanendra of Nepal, turned the nation into a pro-democracy nation.
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Original:  The king is expected to adress the nation at 7:00 p.m..
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Original:  And by 'ultimately' I mean sooner rather than later.  
Revised:  And by 'ultimately' I mean sooner rather than later. " 
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Original: Earlier, United States Embassador James Moriarty, had said that "his [the king's] time is running out" and that "ultimately the king will have to leave if he doesn't compromise.
Revised: Earlier, United States Ambassador James Moriarty, had said that "his [the king's] time is running out" and that "ultimately the king will have to leave if he doesn't compromise.
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Original: U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice will visit and during next week by the opportunity of her participation in the NATO Foreign Ministers meeting in  , Bulgaria.
Revised: U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice will visit and during next week by the opportunity of her participation in the NATO Foreign Ministers meeting in Sofia , Bulgaria.
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Original: What has more recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomena of an observed reduction (nearly a 10\% decline since 1960) of sunlight reaching the surface of Earth, which has been duped the “global dimming” effect.
Revised: What has more recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomena of an observed reduction (nearly a 10\% decline since 1960) of sunlight reaching the surface of Earth, which has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect.
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Original:  The clouds formed by the aerosols particles emitted by the burning of fossil fuels are made of many more tiny droplets than “natural” clouds.
Revised:  The clouds formed by the aerosols particles emitted by the burning of fossil fuels are made of many more tiny droplets than "natural" clouds.
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Original:  Dr. Hansen warns that his research shows that man has just 10 years to reduce greenhouse gases before global warming and other responses to human activity by Earth ’ s climate reach what he calls a tipping point, and becomes unstoppable
Revised:  Dr. Hansen warns that his research shows that man has just 10 years to reduce greenhouse gases before global warming and other responses to human activity by Earth ' s climate reach what he calls a tipping point, and becomes unstoppable
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Original: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired the NOVA program titled - “Dimming the Earth”, which presented research by some leading scientists regarding the complex and chaotic systems of our global climate , and the effects that human activityis having on it.
Revised: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired a NOVA program entitled “Dimming the Earth”, which presented research by some leading scientists regarding the complex and chaotic systems of our global climate , and the effects that human activityis having on it.
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Original: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired the NOVA program titled - “Dimming the Earth”, which presented research by some leading scientists regarding the complex and chaotic systems of our global climate , and the effects that human activityis having on it.
Revised: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired the NOVA program titled - “Dimming the Earth”, which presented research by leading scientists on the complex and chaotic systems of our global climate , and the effects that human activityis having on it.
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Original: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired the NOVA program titled - “Dimming the Earth”, which presented research by some leading scientists regarding the complex and chaotic systems of our global climate , and the effects that human activityis having on it.
Revised: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired the NOVA program titled - “Dimming the Earth”, which presented research by some leading scientists regarding the complex and chaotic systems of our global climate and human activity's effect on it.
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Original:  One of the largest interactions ( scientists call them inputs ) humans have with our atmosphere is our ever increasing ( 2\% per year for this decade ) use of fossil fuels .
Revised:  One of the largest interactions ( or "inputs" ) humans have with our atmosphere is our ever increasing ( 2\% per year for this decade ) use of fossil fuels .
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Original:  One of the largest interactions ( scientists call them inputs ) humans have with our atmosphere is our ever increasing ( 2\% per year for this decade ) use of fossil fuels .
Revised:  One of the largest interactions ( scientists call them inputs ) humans have with our atmosphere is our ever increasing ( 2\% per year for this decade .
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Original:  When we burn fossil fuels in our factories and automobiles , we send their waste into our atmosphere in two forms.
Revised:  Fossil fuels burnt in factories and automobiles , we send their waste into our atmosphere in two forms.
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Original:  When we burn fossil fuels in our factories and automobiles , we send their waste into our atmosphere in two forms.
Revised:  When we burn fossil fuels in our factories and automobiles send their waste into our atmosphere in two forms.
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Original:  The first is CO2 and other greenhouse gases, which have received substantial attention in the last few years because of the way they trap heat in our atmosphere.
Revised:  The first is CO2 and other greenhouse gases, which have received substantial attention in the last few years because of the way they trap heat in the atmosphere.
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Original:  The second category of waste products is tiny particles of sulfur dioxide, soot and ash, which scientists call aerosols (basically smog).
Revised:  The second is the tiny particles of sulfur dioxide, soot and ash, which scientists call aerosols (basically smog).
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Original:  Much research and effort has gone into understanding the negative health effects of air pollution on humans, which has resulted in catalytic converters on our cars , and devices that scrub these solids out of our industrial waste before it goes into the air.
Revised:  Research into understanding the negative health effects of air pollution on humans, which has resulted in catalytic converters on our cars , and devices that scrub these solids out of our industrial waste before it goes into the air.
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Original:  Much research and effort has gone into understanding the negative health effects of air pollution on humans, which has resulted in catalytic converters on our cars , and devices that scrub these solids out of our industrial waste before it goes into the air.
Revised:  Much research and effort has gone into understanding the negative health effects of air pollution has resulted in catalytic converters on our cars , and devices that scrub these solids out of our industrial waste before it goes into the air.
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Original:  Much research and effort has gone into understanding the negative health effects of air pollution on humans, which has resulted in catalytic converters on our cars , and devices that scrub these solids out of our industrial waste before it goes into the air.
Revised:  Much research and effort has gone into understanding the negative health effects of air pollution on humans, which has resulted in the development of catalytic converters for cars as well as devices to remove particulate solids from industrial waste before it goes into the air.
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Original:  Much research and effort has gone into understanding the negative health effects of air pollution on humans, which has resulted in catalytic converters on our cars , and devices that scrub these solids out of our industrial waste before it goes into the air.
Revised:  Much research and effort has gone into understanding the negative health effects of air pollution on humans, which has resulted in catalytic converters on our cars , and devices that scrub these solids out of our industrial waste before it reaches the air.
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Original:  What has more recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomena of an observed reduction ( nearly a 10\% decline since 1960) of sunlight reaching the surface of Earth, which has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect .
Revised:  More recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomena of an observed reduction ( nearly a 10\% decline since 1960) of sunlight reaching the surface of Earth, which has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect .
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Original:  What has more recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomena of an observed reduction ( nearly a 10\% decline since 1960) of sunlight reaching the surface of Earth, which has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect .
Revised:  What has more recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomenon of an observed reduction ( nearly a 10\% decline since 1960) of sunlight reaching the surface of Earth, which has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect .
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Original:  What has more recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomena of an observed reduction ( nearly a 10\% decline since 1960) of sunlight reaching the surface of Earth, which has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect .
Revised:  What has more recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomena of an observed reduction of sunlight reaching Earth's surface— nearly a 10\% decline since 1960) of sunlight reaching the surface of Earth, which has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect .
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Original:  What has more recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomena of an observed reduction ( nearly a 10\% decline since 1960) of sunlight reaching the surface of Earth, which has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect .
Revised:  What has more recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomena of an observed reduction ( nearly a 10\% decline since 1960. This has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect .
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Original:  Taken from I-95 in northern Virginia, January 26, 2001  by NASA scientist Louis Ngyyen . Clouds form when moisture gathers around airborne particles, such as pollen or dust.
Revised:  Taken from I-95 in northern Virginia, January 26, 2001 , by NASA scientist Louis Ngyyen . Clouds form when moisture gathers around airborne particles, such as pollen or dust.
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Original:  Taken from I-95 in northern Virginia, January 26, 2001  by NASA scientist Louis Ngyyen . Clouds form when moisture gathers around airborne particles, such as pollen or dust.
Revised:  Taken from I-95 in northern Virginia, January 26, 2001 by NASA scientist Louis Nguyen . Clouds form when moisture gathers around airborne particles, such as pollen or dust.
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Original:  The clouds formed by the aerosols particles emitted by the burning of fossil fuels are made of many more tiny droplets than "natural" clouds.
Revised:  Clouds formed by the aerosols particles emitted by the burning of fossil fuels are made of many more tiny droplets than "natural" clouds.
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Original:  The clouds formed by the aerosols particles emitted by the burning of fossil fuels are made of many more tiny droplets than "natural" clouds.
Revised:  The clouds formed by the aerosol particles emitted by the burning of fossil fuels are made of many more tiny droplets than "natural" clouds.
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Original:  The clouds formed by the aerosols particles emitted by the burning of fossil fuels are made of many more tiny droplets than "natural" clouds.
Revised:  The clouds formed by the aerosols particles emitted by fossil fuel consumption are made of many more tiny droplets than "natural" clouds.
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Original:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
Revised:  These smog-created clouds have two notable effects : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
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Original:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
Revised:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from reaching Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
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Original:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
Revised:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to water's reflective nature , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
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Original:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
Revised:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
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Original:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
Revised:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space , allowing even less light to reach the surface .
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Original:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach the surface .
Revised:  These smog created clouds have a twofold effect : they shield sunlight from getting to Earth's surface and, due to the reflective natureof water , the millions of tiny droplets held suspended in them reflect light back into space and allow less light to reach Earth .
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Original:  Without global dimming,  Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is . So there is a sort of tug-a-war between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
Revised:  Without global dimming, however, Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is . So there is a sort of tug-a-war between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
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Original:  Without global dimming,  Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is . So there is a sort of tug-a-war between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
Revised:  Without global dimming, Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is , suggesting a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
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Original:  Our efforts to mitigate the human health dangers of smog have allowed more heat into our atmosphere and brought about a sharper increase in global warming.
Revised:  Efforts to mitigate the human health dangers of smog have allowed more heat into our atmosphere and brought about a sharper increase in global warming.
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