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Original:  A similar modus operandi occured where simultaneous shootouts across Mexico occured attacking police stations in July.
Revised:  A similar modus operandi was seen where simultaneous shootouts across Mexico occured attacking police stations in July.
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Original:  A similar modus operandi occured where simultaneous shootouts across Mexico occured attacking police stations in July.
Revised:  A similar modus operandi occured where simultaneous shootouts across Mexico occurred targeting police stations in July.
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Original:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December of 2006 , has resulted in 10,000 fatalities, about 10\% of these have been police officials.
Revised:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December of 2006 has resulted in 10,000 fatalities, about 10\% of these have been police officials.
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Original:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December of 2006 , has resulted in 10,000 fatalities, about 10\% of these have been police officials.
Revised:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December of 2006 , has resulted in 10,000 fatalities, about 10\% of which have been police officials.
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Original:  On Thursday, August 6, 2009, several shootouts occured in Mexico leaving nine cartel suspects dead, killing seven police officers, and injuring close to 30 others.
Revised:  On Thursday, several shootouts occured in Mexico leaving nine cartel suspects dead, killing seven police officers, and injuring close to 30 others.
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Original:  Following the several gun battles police seized of 1.2 million pesos (more than  $92,000), cocaine, assault rifles, police uniforms, bullet proof vests, handcuffs, hand grenades, and a variety of other military weapons.
Revised:  Following the several gun battles police seized of 1.2 million pesos (more than US $92,000), cocaine, assault rifles, police uniforms, bullet proof vests, handcuffs, hand grenades, and a variety of other military weapons.
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Original:  Mexico's president, Felipe Calderon , along with American President, Barack Obama, have initiated a crack down on drug gangs.
Revised:  The President of Mexico Felipe Calderón , along with American President, Barack Obama, have initiated a crack down on drug gangs.
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Original:  Mexico's president, Felipe Calderon , along with American President, Barack Obama, have initiated a crack down on drug gangs.
Revised:  Mexico's president, Felipe Calderon , along with US President, Barack Obama, have initiated a crack down on drug gangs.
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Original:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December of 2006 has resulted in  10,000 fatalities,  about 10\% of which have been police officials.
Revised:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December 2006 has resulted in 10,000 fatalities, about 10\% of which have been police officials.
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Original:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December of 2006 has resulted in  10,000 fatalities,  about 10\% of which have been police officials.
Revised:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December of 2006 has resulted in 10,000 fatalities, of which about 10\% of which have been police officials.
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Original:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December of 2006 has resulted in  10,000 fatalities,  about 10\% of which have been police officials.
Revised:  The Mexican Drug War which began in December of 2006 has resulted in 10,000 fatalities, about 10\% have been police officials.
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Original: Following the several gun battles police seized of 1.2 million pesos (more than US$92,000), cocaine, assault rifles, police uniforms, bullet proof vests, handcuffs, hand grenades, and a variety of other military weapons.
Revised: Following the several gun battles , police seized 1.2 million pesos (more than US$92,000), cocaine, assault rifles, police uniforms, bullet proof vests, handcuffs, hand grenades, and a variety of other military weapons.
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Original:  Acting on a tip, police pulled over four trucks near Pachuca which resulted in a firefight erupted which lasted 20 minutes as cartel suspects fled the scene.
Revised:  Acting on a tip, police pulled over four trucks near Pachuca which resulted in a firefight , lasting 20 minutes as cartel suspects fled the scene.
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Original:  Acting on a tip, police pulled over four trucks near Pachuca which resulted in a firefight erupted which lasted 20 minutes as cartel suspects fled the scene.
Revised:  Acting on a tip, police pulled over four trucks near Pachuca which resulted in a firefight erupted which lasted 20 minutes , after which cartel suspects fled the scene.
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Original:  The cities of Silao, La Calera and Irapuato in the state of Guanajuato suffered both grenade and artillery shootouts which took the live of one police officer  killed an innocent bystander,  critically injured another 18.
Revised:  The cities of Silao, La Calera and Irapuato in the state of Guanajuato suffered both grenade and artillery shootouts which took the life of one police officer killed an innocent bystander, critically injured another 18.
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Original:  The cities of Silao, La Calera and Irapuato in the state of Guanajuato suffered both grenade and artillery shootouts which took the live of one police officer  killed an innocent bystander,  critically injured another 18.
Revised:  The cities of Silao, La Calera and Irapuato in the state of Guanajuato suffered both grenade and artillery shootouts which took the live of one police officer , killed an innocent bystander, critically injured another 18.
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Original:  The cities of Silao, La Calera and Irapuato in the state of Guanajuato suffered both grenade and artillery shootouts which took the live of one police officer  killed an innocent bystander,  critically injured another 18.
Revised:  The cities of Silao, La Calera and Irapuato in the state of Guanajuato suffered both grenade and artillery shootouts which took the live of one police officer killed an innocent bystander, and critically injured another 18.
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Original: Federal agents went missing and a search initiated by the Hidalgo state police found them alive near an auto racetrack in the Mineral de la Reforma municipality.
Revised: Federal agents went missing and a search initiated by the state police found them alive near an auto racetrack in the Mineral de la Reforma municipality.
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Original:  Acting on a tip, police pulled over four trucks near Pachuca which resulted in a firefight, lasting 20 minutes, after which cartel suspects fled the scene.
Revised:  Acting on a tip, police pulled over four trucks near which resulted in a firefight, lasting 20 minutes, after which cartel suspects fled the scene.
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Original:  Another attack Thursday night killed a police investigator in the city of Ciudad Juárez in the state of Chihuahua .
Revised:  Another attack Thursday night killed a police investigator in the city of Ciudad Juárez in the state of .
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Original: A powerful typhoon that killed dozens people, affected over 28,000 people in the Philippines and has caused the evacuation of 21,190 people from south east China.
Revised: A powerful typhoon has killed dozens people, affected over 28,000 people in the Philippines and has caused the evacuation of 21,190 people from south east China.
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Original: A powerful typhoon that killed dozens people, affected over 28,000 people in the Philippines and has caused the evacuation of 21,190 people from south east China.
Revised: A powerful typhoon that killed dozens people, affected over 28,000 people in the Philippines and caused the evacuation of 21,190 people from south east China.
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Original:  The Philippines were hit by 175 kilometers per hour gale-force winds with gustiness of up to 210 kph, rainstorms to the regions which triggered flooding , mountain torrents and landslides.
Revised:  The Philippines were hit by 175 kilometers per hour winds with gusts of up to 210 kph, rainstorms to the regions which triggered flooding , mountain torrents and landslides.
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Original:  The Philippines were hit by 175 kilometers per hour gale-force winds with gustiness of up to 210 kph, rainstorms to the regions which triggered flooding , mountain torrents and landslides.
Revised:  The Philippines were hit by 175 kilometers per hour gale-force winds with gustiness of up to 210 kph, as well as heavy rain which triggered flooding , mountain torrents and landslides.
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Original:  The Philippines were hit by 175 kilometers per hour gale-force winds with gustiness of up to 210 kph, rainstorms to the regions which triggered flooding , mountain torrents and landslides.
Revised:  The Philippines were hit by 175 kilometers per hour gale-force winds with gustiness of up to 210 kph, rainstorms to the regions which triggered flooding and landslides.
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Original:  Electricity is down in some areas of the Phillipines resulting in a collapse in contact as radios and cellphones have not been re-charged.
Revised:  Electricity is down in some areas of the Philippines resulting in a collapse in contact as radios and cellphones have not been re-charged.
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Original:  School classes have been cancelled in various locations across the Phillipines , and many city roads are not traverseable due to flood waters.
Revised:  School classes have been cancelled in various locations across the Philippines , and many city roads are not traverseable due to flood waters.
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Original:  A capsized fishing boat off the coast of the province of Hainan has intitiated search and rescue efforts for nine missing fishermen.
Revised:  A capsized fishing boat off the coast of the province of Hainan has initiated search and rescue efforts for nine missing fishermen.
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Original:  Born in Malaysia, Top is believed to have been behind every terrorist attack in Indonesia since 2002, including the 2002 Bali bombings and the bombing of the Marriott and Ritz-Carlton hotels this July.
Revised:  Born in Malaysia, Top is believed to have been behind a string of terrorist attacks in Indonesia since 2002, including the 2002 Bali bombings and the bombing of the Marriott and Ritz-Carlton hotels this July.
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Original:  "Russia does not have the will to normalize relations with Estonia and, I would say, even with the European Union and NATO," explained Marko Mihkelson, the deputy chairman of the Estonian foreign relations commission  . Estonia is now urging Russia to reconsider its stance, while Lavrov told reporters in Helsinki that they will have to start from scratch.
Revised:  "Russia does not have the will to normalize relations with Estonia and, I would say, even with the European Union and NATO," explained Marko Mihkelson, the deputy chairman of the Estonian foreign relations commission . Estonia is now urging Russia to reconsider its stance, while Lavrov told reporters in Helsinki that the two parties will have to start from scratch.
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Original: According to reports,the  helicopter was a Eurocopter AS 350 and was owned by Liberty Tours.
Revised: According to reports,the The helicopter was a Eurocopter AS 350 and was owned by Liberty Tours.
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Original:  According to reports, the plane was a Piper PA-32 single engine, fixed wing aircraft with the tail number of N71MC   .
Revised:  According to reports, the plane was a Piper PA-32 single engine, fixed wing aircraft with the tail number of N71MC . .
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Original: The collision occurs just seven months after a US Airways plane carrying 155 people  crashed into the Hudson following a bird strike.
Revised: The collision occurs just seven months after a US Airways plane carrying 155 people , crashed into the Hudson following a bird strike.
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Original:  A small plane and a tourist helicopter have collided in mid-air over the Hudson River outside Hoboken, New Jersey.
Revised:  A small plane and a tourist helicopter have collided in mid-air over the Hudson River above Hoboken, New Jersey.
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Original:  At least six people were on the helicopter, and as many as three people were on the plane.
Revised:  At least six people were on the helicopter, and three people were on the plane.
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Original:  He had been named captain of the side last July, replacing Raúl Tamudo
Revised:  Jarque had been named captain of the side last July, replacing Raúl Tamudo
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Original: It happened while he was with the rest of the side carrying out pre-season training at Coverciano in Italy.
Revised: Jarque was practicing during pre-season training at Coverciano in Italy.
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Original:  The player was in the team hotel ahead of a friendly match planned for Sunday against Bolonia.
Revised:  Jarque was staying in the team hotel ahead of a friendly match planned for Sunday against Bolonia.
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Original:  The player was in the team hotel ahead of a friendly match planned for Sunday against Bolonia.
Revised:  The player was in the team hotel ahead of a match planned for Sunday against Bolonia.
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Original: Jarque was sharing a room with another player, Ferran Corominas , who left him talking to his girlfriend when he went to dine on Saturday night.
Revised: Jarque was sharing a room with another player, Ferran Corominas who says Jarque was talking to his girlfriend when he went to dine on Saturday night.
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Original: Jarque was sharing a room with another player, Ferran Corominas , who left him talking to his girlfriend when he went to dine on Saturday night.
Revised: Jarque was sharing a room with another player, Ferran Corominas , who left him talking to his girlfriend when he went to dinner on Saturday night.
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Original:  When he saw that Jarque did not appear to eat he went back to the room and found the player unconscious .
Revised:  When he Corominas noticed that Jarque did not appear to eat he went back to the room and found the player unconscious .
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Original:  When he saw that Jarque did not appear to eat he went back to the room and found the player unconscious .
Revised:  When he saw that Jarque did not show up for dinner, he went back to the room and found the player unconscious .
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Original:  When he saw that Jarque did not appear to eat he went back to the room and found the player unconscious .
Revised:  When he saw that Jarque did not appear to eat he went back to the room and found Jarque unconscious in his room .
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Original:  Despite being taken to a local hospital  all efforts to revive him failed .
Revised:  Despite being taken to a local hospital , all efforts to revive him failed .
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Original:  Despite being taken to a local hospital  all efforts to revive him failed .
Revised:  Despite being taken to a local hospital all efforts to revive him were unsuccessful .
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Original:  When he Corominas noticed that Jarque did not show up for dinner, he went back to the  room and found Jarque unconscious in his room .
Revised:  When he Corominas noticed that Jarque did not show up for dinner, he went back to the hotel room and found Jarque unconscious in his room .
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Original:  When he Corominas noticed that Jarque did not show up for dinner, he went back to the  room and found Jarque unconscious in his room .
Revised:  When he Corominas noticed that Jarque did not show up for dinner, he went back to the room and found Jarque unconscious .
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Original: Police in Salinas have identified a 15 year old boy who was killed in a gang related shooting.
Revised: Police in Salinas have identified a 15 year old boy killed in what is believed to be a gang related shooting.
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Original:   Jose Manual Perez was the boy's name when police found him around 2:15 p.m. at the 500 block of Terrace Street when police got reports of a shooting victim .
Revised:  The boy Jose Manual Perez was the boy's name when police found him around 2:15 p.m. at the 500 block of Terrace Street when police got reports of a shooting victim .
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Original:   Jose Manual Perez was the boy's name when police found him around 2:15 p.m. at the 500 block of Terrace Street when police got reports of a shooting victim .
Revised:  Jose Manual Perez was found by police at 2:15 p.m. at the 500 block of Terrace Street when police got reports of a shooting victim .
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Original:   Jose Manual Perez was the boy's name when police found him around 2:15 p.m. at the 500 block of Terrace Street when police got reports of a shooting victim .
Revised:  Jose Manual Perez was the boy's name when police found him around 2:15 p.m. local time, when they responded to reports of a shooting victim .
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Original:   Jose Manual Perez was the boy's name when police found him around 2:15 p.m. at the 500 block of Terrace Street when police got reports of a shooting victim .
Revised:  Jose Manual Perez was the boy's name when police found him around 2:15 p.m. at the 500 block of Terrace Street when police got reports of a shooting at Terrace Street .
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Original:  Perez had many bullet wounds when police found him and he was rushed to the Navitidad Hospital Medical Center .
Revised:  Perez was discovered with many bullet wounds when police found him and he was rushed to the Navitidad Hospital Medical Center .
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Original:  Perez had many bullet wounds when police found him and he was rushed to the Navitidad Hospital Medical Center .
Revised:  Perez had many bullet wounds and was rushed to the Navitidad Hospital Medical Center .
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Original:  Perez had many bullet wounds when police found him and he was rushed to the Navitidad Hospital Medical Center .
Revised:  Perez had many bullet wounds when police found him and he was rushed to Navitidad Hospital Medical Center .
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Original:  He died in the hospital just shortly after police rushed him to the Medical Center . Police is investigating the shooting as being gang related .
Revised:  He died in the hospital just shortly after his arrival at the hospital . Police is investigating the shooting as being gang related .
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Original:  He died in the hospital just shortly after police rushed him to the Medical Center . Police is investigating the shooting as being gang related .
Revised:  He died in the hospital just shortly after police rushed him to the Medical Center . Police are investigating the shooting as being gang related .
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Original:  Police are investigating the shooting as being gang related and are asking the public for leads on the fatal shooting.
Revised:  Police are investigating the shooting as being gang related and are asking the public for leads on the atal shooting.
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Original: Police are investigating the shooting as being gang related and are asking the public for leads on the atal shooting.
Revised: Police are investigating the shooting as being gang related and are asking the public for leads on the fatal shooting.
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Original: Police are investigating the  shooting as being gang related and are asking the public for leads on the fatal shooting .
Revised: Police are investigating the fatal shooting as being gang related and are asking the public for leads on the fatal shooting .
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Original: Police are investigating the  shooting as being gang related and are asking the public for leads on the fatal shooting .
Revised: Police are investigating the shooting as being gang related and are asking the public for help in catching the perpetrators .
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Original:  Three adults and at least five children were in the victim's car.
Revised:  At least three adults and five children were in the victim's car.
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Original:  Police were pursuing a suspect who refused to stopfor police, when he slammed into a GMC Sierra pickup truck , carrying what appears to be a family.
Revised:  Police were pursuing a suspect who , after refusing to stop, slammed into a GMC Sierra pickup truck , carrying what appears to be a family.
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Original:  Two adults and five children were in the truck .
Revised:  Two adults and five children .
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Original: Map highlighting location of Dinuba, California within Tulare County.
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Original:  The crash occured shortly after takeoff from Jackson Hole Airport in Grand Teton National Park at about 1:20 p.m. CDT. Walton was the only person killed in the cras
Revised:  The crash occured shortly after takeoff from Jackson Hole Airport in Grand Teton National Park at about 1:20 p.m. CDT. Walton was the only person killed in the crash
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Original: John Walton, son of Wal-Mart founder Sam Walton and the 11th richest person in the world, was killed in a plane crash in Wyoming.
Revised: John Walton, son of Wal-Mart founder Sam Walton and the 11th richest person in the world, has been killed in a plane crash in Wyoming.
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Original:  Walton was involved in several business interests over the years, including crop-dusting and boat construction  
Revised:  Walton was involved in several business interests over the years, including crop-dusting and boat construction . 
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Original:  Walton was involved in several business interests over the years, including crop-dusting and boat construction .
Revised:  Walton was involved in several business interests over the years, including crop-dusting and boat construction 
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Original:  For the next week all U.S flags on Wal-Mart buildings and parking lots alike will be half staff in honor of John T. Walton
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Original: John Walton, son of Wal-Mart founder Sam Walton and the 11th richest person in the world, has been killed in a plane crash on june 27 in Wyoming.
Revised: John Walton, son of Wal-Mart founder Sam Walton and the 11th richest person in the world, has been killed in a plane crash on June 27 in Wyoming.
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Original:  The crash occured shortly after takeoff from Jackson Hole Airport in Grand Teton National Park at about 1:20 p.m. CDT. Walton was the only person killed in the crash.
Revised:  The crash occurred shortly after takeoff from Jackson Hole Airport in Grand Teton National Park at about 1:20 p.m. CDT. Walton was the only person killed in the crash.
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Original:  The woman remains critical after losing the child in the crash, which occured in Fort Wayne, northeastern Indiana   
Revised:  The woman remains critical after losing the child in the crash, which occured in Fort Wayne, northeastern Indiana . 
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Original:  The woman remains critical after losing the child in the crash, which occured in Fort Wayne, northeastern Indiana.
Revised:  The woman is in critical condition following the crash, which occured in Fort Wayne, northeastern Indiana.
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Original:  The woman remains critical after losing the child in the crash, which occured in Fort Wayne, northeastern Indiana.
Revised:  The woman remains critical after losing the child in the crash, which occurred in Fort Wayne, northeastern Indiana.
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Original:  The woman remains critical after losing the child in the crash, which occured in Fort Wayne, northeastern Indiana.
Revised:  The woman remains critical after losing the child in the crash, which occured in Fort Wayne, Indiana.
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Original:  A photograph of the damaged bus was posted on the band's website, and this showed moderate crumpling to the forward ower area of the vehicle
Revised:  A photograph of the damaged bus was posted on the band's website, depicting moderate crumpling to the forward ower area of the vehicle
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