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Original:   To address these issues, the Machine Learning Model Owner (MLMO ) needs to (i) decide how much data and energy that the mobile devices use for the training and (ii) determine the mining difficulty to minimize the training latencyand energy consumption while achieving the target model accuracy .
Revised:  To address these issues, the MLMO needs to (i) decide how much data and energy that the mobile devices use for the training and (ii) determine the mining difficulty to minimize the training latencyand energy consumption while achieving the target model accuracy .
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Original:   To address these issues, the Machine Learning Model Owner (MLMO ) needs to (i) decide how much data and energy that the mobile devices use for the training and (ii) determine the mining difficulty to minimize the training latencyand energy consumption while achieving the target model accuracy .
Revised:  To address these issues, the Machine Learning Model Owner (MLMO ) needs to (i) decide how much data and energy that the mobile devices use for the training and (ii) determine the mining difficulty to minimize the system latency, energy consumption, and incentive cost while achieving the target model accuracy .
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Original:   To address these issues, the Machine Learning Model Owner (MLMO ) needs to (i) decide how much data and energy that the mobile devices use for the training and (ii) determine the mining difficulty to minimize the training latencyand energy consumption while achieving the target model accuracy .
Revised:  To address these issues, the Machine Learning Model Owner (MLMO ) needs to (i) decide how much data and energy that the mobile devices use for the training and (ii) determine the mining difficulty to minimize the training latencyand energy consumption while achieving the target accuracy for the model .
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Original:  It should be noted that at the time of the initial twitter reaction no tabled regional data on the epidemic was readily available  .
Revised:  More strikingly, at the time of the initial twitter reaction no tabled regional data on the epidemic was readily available .
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Original:  Specifically, the intensity of COVID-19 related social media activity from different Italian, Spanish and United States regions at the beginning of the epidemic, predicts well the total number of deaths reached almost a month later in each region.
Revised:  We find significant proportionality between early social media reaction and the cumulative number of COVID-19 deaths almost a month later in each region.
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Original:  Our findings could underpin the creation of real-time novelty detection systems aimed at early reporting of SARS-like mortality and thus early activation of control measures in future pandemics .
Revised:  Our findings could underpin the creation of real-time alert systems that could be of help for crisis-management and intervention, especially in developing countries. Such systems could contribute to inform fast-response policy making at early stages of a crisis .
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Original:  Building on the  density matrix semantics of (Correia et al, 2019), we extend the interpretation of the type system with an extra spin density matrix space.
Revised:  Building on the density matrix semantics , we extend the interpretation of the type system with an extra spin density matrix space.
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Original:  Our method introduces a way of simultaneously representing co-existing interpretations of ambiguous utterances, and provides a uniform framework for the integration of lexical and derivational ambiguity.
Revised:  Our method introduces a way of simultaneously representing co existing interpretations of ambiguous utterances, and provides a uniform framework for the integration of lexical and derivational ambiguity.
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Original:  Our method introduces a way of simultaneously representing co existing interpretations of ambiguous utterances, and provides a uniform framework for the integration of lexical and derivational ambiguity.
Revised:  Our method introduces a way of simultaneously representing co-existing interpretations of ambiguous utterances, and provides a uniform framework for the integration of lexical and derivational ambiguity.
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Original:  In the fault-tolerant regime, we optimize the \rzgate gate counts and depths\tgate  , assuming the use of a product-formula algorithm for implementation.
Revised:  In the fault-tolerant regime, we optimize the \rzgate and\tgate , assuming the use of a product-formula algorithm for implementation.
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Original:   In the pre-fault tolerant regime, we optimize the two-qubit gate counts, assuming the use of  variational quantum eigensolver (VQE) approach.
Revised:  In the pre-fault tolerant regime, we optimize the two-qubit gate counts, assuming the use of the variational quantum eigensolver (VQE) approach.
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Original:  Specifically to the latter, we present a framework that enables bootstrapping the VQE progression towards the convergence of the ground-state energy of the fermionic system.
Revised:  Specific to the latter, we present a framework that enables bootstrapping the VQE progression towards the convergence of the ground-state energy of the fermionic system.
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Original:  This framework, based on perturbation theory, also improves the energy estimate at each cycle of the VQE progression dramatically, resulting in significant savings of quantum resources  required to be within a pre-specified tolerance from the known ground-state energy in the test-bed, classically-accessible system of the water molecule .
Revised:  This framework, based on perturbation theory, is capable of improving the energy estimate at each cycle of the VQE progression dramatically, resulting in significant savings of quantum resources required to be within a pre-specified tolerance from the known ground-state energy in the test-bed, classically-accessible system of the water molecule .
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Original:  This framework, based on perturbation theory, also improves the energy estimate at each cycle of the VQE progression dramatically, resulting in significant savings of quantum resources  required to be within a pre-specified tolerance from the known ground-state energy in the test-bed, classically-accessible system of the water molecule .
Revised:  This framework, based on perturbation theory, also improves the energy estimate at each cycle of the VQE progression dramatically, resulting in significant savings of quantum resources required to be within a pre-specified tolerance from the known ground-state energy .
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Original:  We also explore a suite of generalized transformations of fermion to qubit operators and show that resource-requirement savings of up to nearly 20\\%DIF < is possible.abstract %DIF > is 
Revised:  We also explore a suite of generalized transformations of fermion to qubit operators and show that resource-requirement savings of up to nearly 20\\%DIF < is possible.abstract %DIF > is possible.
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Original:  We also explore a suite of generalized transformations of fermion to qubit operators and show that resource-requirement savings of up to more than 20\\%DIF < is %DIF > , in small  possible.
Revised:  We also explore a suite of generalized transformations of fermion to qubit operators and show that resource-requirement savings of up to more than 20\\%DIF < is %DIF > , in small instances, is possible.
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Original: To thrive in dynamic environments, animals can generate flexible behavior and rapidly adapt responses to a changing context and internal state.
Revised: To thrive in dynamic environments, animals must be capable of rapidly and flexibly adapting behavioral responses to a changing context and internal state.
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Original:  Contextual  modulations may occur early in the cortical hierarchy and may be implemented via afferent projections from top-down pathways or neuromodulation onto sensory cortex .
Revised:  Contextual modulations may occur early in the cortical hierarchy and may be implemented via top-down projections from cortico-cortical or neuromodulatory pathways .
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Original:  We tested our model using large-scale electrophysiological recordings from the visual hierarchy in freely running mice, where  a decrease in single-cell  gain during locomotion explained the observed acceleration of visual processing speed .
Revised:  We tested our model using large-scale electrophysiological recordings from the visual hierarchy in freely running mice, where a decrease in single-cell gain during locomotion explained the observed acceleration of visual processing .
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Original:  Our results establish a novel theory of cell-type specific perturbations linking connectivity, dynamics, and information processing via gain modulations .
Revised:  Our results establish a novel theory of cell-type specific perturbations linking connectivity, dynamics, and information processing via gain modulation .
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Original:  We asked participants to indicate their emotions and express these in text and created the Real World Worry Dataset of 5,000 texts (2,500 short + 2,500 long texts).
Revised:  We asked participants to indicate their emotions and express these in text . This resulted in the Real World Worry Dataset of 5,000 texts (2,500 short + 2,500 long texts).
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Original:  This has changed the daily life of tens of millions of people, and urged people to turn their discussions online, e.g., via online social media sites like Twitter.
Revised:  This have changed the daily life of tens of millions of people, and urged people to turn their discussions online, e.g., via online social media sites like Twitter.
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Original: In practical environments, recent massive MIMO measurements demonstrate that user channels can be correlated .
Revised: In practical propagation environments, different massive MIMO users can have correlated angles in spatial paths .
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Original:  Furthermore, nearly one-third of users, even when they are tens of wavelengths apart, have a correlation that is more than twice the correlation of an i.i.d. Rayleigh fading model.
Revised:  Furthermore, nearly one-third of users, even when they are tens of wavelengths apart, have a correlation that is at least twice higher than the correlation in the i.i.d. Rayleigh fading model.
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Original: Personality and demographics are important variables in social sciences, while in NLP they can aid in intepretability and removal of societal biases.
Revised: Personality and demographics are important variables in social sciences, while in NLP they can aid in interpretability and removal of societal biases.
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Original: With the end of both Dennard's scaling and Moore's law, computer users and researchers are aggressively exploring alternative forms of compute in order to continue the performance scaling that we have come to enjoy.
Revised: With the end of both Dennard's scaling and Moore's law, computer users and researchers are aggressively exploring alternative forms of computing in order to continue the performance scaling that we have come to enjoy.
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Original:  We summarize nearly three decades of literature on the subject, with  particular focus on premises behind the different CGRA architectures and how they have evolved.
Revised:  We summarize nearly three decades of literature on the subject, with a particular focus on premises behind the different CGRA architectures and how they have evolved.
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Original:  We summarize nearly three decades of literature on the subject, with  particular focus on premises behind the different CGRA architectures and how they have evolved.
Revised:  We summarize nearly three decades of literature on the subject, with particular focus on the premise behind the different CGRA architectures and how they have evolved.
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Original:  We summarize nearly three decades of literature on the subject, with  particular focus on premises behind the different CGRA architectures and how they have evolved.
Revised:  We summarize nearly three decades of literature on the subject, with particular focus on premises behind the different CGRAs and how they have evolved.
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Original:  Next, we compile metrics of available CGRAs and analyze their performance properties in order to understand and discover existing knowledge gaps and opportunities for future CGRA research specialized towards High-Performance Computing (HPC).
Revised:  Next, we compile metrics of available CGRAs and analyze their performance properties in order to understand and discover knowledge gaps and opportunities for future CGRA research specialized towards High-Performance Computing (HPC).
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Original: {\sc  {\it   We prove that the IRF space can be endowed with a probability induced by the Isolation Tree algorithm (iTree).
Revised: {\sc ,{\it We prove that the IRF space can be endowed with a probability induced by the Isolation Tree algorithm (iTree).
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Original: We present the mathematical analysis of the Isolation Random Forest Method (IRF Method) for anomaly detection , introduced in%DIFDELCMD < {\sc %%% F. ~T. Liu, K.~M.
Revised: In this paper, the mathematical analysis of the Isolation Random Forest Method (IRF Method) for anomaly detection , introduced in%DIFDELCMD < {\sc %%% F. ~T. Liu, K.~M.
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Original: We present the mathematical analysis of the Isolation Random Forest Method (IRF Method) for anomaly detection , introduced in%DIFDELCMD < {\sc %%% F. ~T. Liu, K.~M.
Revised: We present the mathematical analysis of the Isolation Random Forest Method (IRF Method) for anomaly detection %DIFDELCMD < {\sc %%% F. ~T. Liu, K.~M.
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Original:  Ting, Z.-H. Zhou: ,%DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% Isolation-based anomaly detection , TKDD 6 (2012) 3:1--3:39.
Revised:  Ting, Z.-H. Zhou: %DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% Isolation-based anomaly detection , TKDD 6 (2012) 3:1--3:39.
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Original:  Ting, Z.-H. Zhou: ,%DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% Isolation-based anomaly detection , TKDD 6 (2012) 3:1--3:39.
Revised:  Ting, Z.-H. Zhou: ,%DIFDELCMD < {\it %%% , TKDD 6 (2012) 3:1--3:39.
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Original:  In this setting, the convergence of the IRF method is proved , using the Law of Large Numbers.
Revised:  In this setting, the convergence of the IRF method is proved using the Law of Large Numbers.
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Original:  A couple of counterexamples are presented to show that the  method is inconclusive and no certificate of quality can be given, when using it as a means to detect anomalies.
Revised:  A couple of counterexamples are presented to show that the method is inconclusive and no quality certificate can be given, when using it as a means to detect anomalies.
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Original:  Hence, a more robust version of the method is proposed whose mathematical foundation is fully justified.
Revised:  Hence, an alternative version of IRF is proposed, whose mathematical foundation is fully justified.
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Original:  Finally, numerical experiments are presented to compare the performance of the classic method with the proposed one.
Revised:  Finally, numerical experiments are presented to compare the performance of the classic IRF with the proposed one.
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Original:  Our results indicate that concentrating the VMs placement at the PON optical line terminal (OLT) that interconnects several IoT networks can help in saving power consumption when the VMs process raw data at low traffic reduction percentages.
Revised:  Our results show that the power consumption can be reduced by consolidating the placement of these VMs at the PON optical line terminal (OLT) that interconnects several IoT networks can help in saving power consumption when the VMs process raw data at low traffic reduction percentages.
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Original:  Our results indicate that concentrating the VMs placement at the PON optical line terminal (OLT) that interconnects several IoT networks can help in saving power consumption when the VMs process raw data at low traffic reduction percentages.
Revised:  Our results indicate that concentrating the VMs placement at the PON Optical Line Terminal (OLT) that interconnects several IoT networks can help in saving power consumption when the VMs process raw data at low traffic reduction percentages.
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Original:  Our results indicate that concentrating the VMs placement at the PON optical line terminal (OLT) that interconnects several IoT networks can help in saving power consumption when the VMs process raw data at low traffic reduction percentages.
Revised:  Our results indicate that concentrating the VMs placement at the PON optical line terminal (OLT) in cases where the traffic volume is still high after data processing, ie at low traffic reduction percentages.
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Original:  On the other hand, VMs should be placed in lower layer relays at high traffic reduction ratios  .
Revised:  On the other hand, at high traffic reduction ratios .
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Original:  Our results indicate that  up to 19\% of the total power can be saved while utilizing PONs and serving heterogeneous VMs. For real time implementation, a heuristic is developed based on the MILP model insights  with very comparable MILP-heuristic power consumption values.
Revised:  Our results indicate that utilizing PONs and serving heterogeneous VMs can save up to 19\% of the total power can be saved while utilizing PONs and serving heterogeneous VMs. For real time implementation, a heuristic is developed based on the MILP model insights with very comparable MILP-heuristic power consumption values.
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Original:  Our results indicate that  up to 19\% of the total power can be saved while utilizing PONs and serving heterogeneous VMs. For real time implementation, a heuristic is developed based on the MILP model insights  with very comparable MILP-heuristic power consumption values.
Revised:  Our results indicate that up to 19\% of the total power . Based on the MILP model insights with very comparable MILP-heuristic power consumption values.
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Original:  Our results indicate that  up to 19\% of the total power can be saved while utilizing PONs and serving heterogeneous VMs. For real time implementation, a heuristic is developed based on the MILP model insights  with very comparable MILP-heuristic power consumption values.
Revised:  Our results indicate that up to 19\% of the total power can be saved while utilizing PONs and serving heterogeneous VMs. For real time implementation, a heuristic is developed based on the MILP model insights , a heuristic is developed with very comparable MILP-heuristic power consumption values.
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Original:  We propose a description of these non-square boxes, which we call open diagrams, in terms of coends and the monoidal bicategory of profunctors , with features of what could be considered a graphical calculus for these coends.
Revised:  We propose a description of these non-square boxes, which we call open diagrams, using the monoidal bicategory of profunctors , with features of what could be considered a graphical calculus for these coends.
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Original: With the spiraling pandemic of the Coronavirus Disease 2019 (COVID-19), it has becoming inherently important to disseminate accurate and timely information about the disease .
Revised: With the spiraling pandemic of the Coronavirus Disease 2019 (COVID-19), it has becoming inherently important to disseminate accurate and timely information .
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Original:  Due to the ubiquity of Internet connectivity and smart devices, social sensing is emerging as a dynamic  sensing paradigm to collect real-time observations from online users.
Revised:  Due to the ubiquity of Internet connectivity and smart devices, social sensing is emerging as a dynamic sensing paradigm to extract real-time observations from online users.
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Original:  In this vision paper we propose CovidSens, the concept of social-sensing-based risk alerting systems to notify the general public  about the COVID-19 spread  .
Revised:  In this paper, we propose CovidSens, the concept of social-sensing-based risk alerting systems to notify the general public about the COVID-19 spread .
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Original:  In this vision paper we propose CovidSens, the concept of social-sensing-based risk alerting systems to notify the general public  about the COVID-19 spread  .
Revised:  In this vision paper we propose CovidSens, the concept of social-sensing-based risk alerting systems to notify the general public informed about the COVID-19 spread .
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Original:  How to distill reliable information about the disease with the coexistence of prevailing rumors and misinformation in the social media ?
Revised:  How to distill reliable information about the disease with the coexistence of prevailing rumors and misinformation ?
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Original:  How to inform the general public about the latest state of the spread timely and effectively and alert them to remain prepared ?
Revised:  How to inform the general public about the state of the spread timely and effectively and alert them to remain prepared ?
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Original:  In this vision paper, we discuss the roles of CovidSens and identify the potential challenges in implementing reliable social-sensing-based risk alerting systems.
Revised:  In this vision paper, we discuss the roles of CovidSens and identify potential challenges in implementing reliable social-sensing-based risk alerting systems.
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Original:  In this vision paper, we discuss the roles of CovidSens and identify the potential challenges in implementing reliable social-sensing-based risk alerting systems.
Revised:  In this vision paper, we discuss the roles of CovidSens and identify the potential challenges in developing reliable social sensing based risk alert systems.
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Original:  We envision that approaches originating from multiple disciplines (e.g. estimation theory, machine learning, constrained optimization) can be effective in addressing the challenges.
Revised:  We envision that approaches originating from multiple disciplines can be effective in addressing the challenges.
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Original: With the spiraling pandemic of the Coronavirus Disease 2019 (COVID-19), it has becoming inherently important to disseminate accurate and timely information  .
Revised: With the spiraling pandemic of the Coronavirus Disease 2019 (COVID-19), it has becoming inherently important to disseminate accurate and timely information about the disease .
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Original:  We envision unprecedented opportunity to leverage posts generated by ordinary people to build a real-time sensing and analytic system for gathering and circulating COVID-19 propagation data.
Revised:  We envision unprecedented opportunities to leverage posts generated by ordinary people to build a real-time sensing and analytic system for gathering and circulating COVID-19 propagation data.
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Original:  We envision unprecedented opportunity to leverage posts generated by ordinary people to build a real-time sensing and analytic system for gathering and circulating COVID-19 propagation data.
Revised:  We envision unprecedented opportunity to leverage posts generated by ordinary people to build real-time sensing and analytic system for gathering and circulating COVID-19 propagation data.
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Original:  Specifically, the vision of CovidSens attempts to answer the questions: How to distill reliable information about COVID-19 with prevailing rumors and misinformation?
Revised:  Specifically, the vision of CovidSens attempts to answer the questions: How to distill reliable information on COVID-19 with prevailing rumors and misinformation?
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