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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs , Senator Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs Chris Ellison moved to substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" for "opposition to." Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this . Greens leader, Senator Brown said, " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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Original: ]". There was confusion to whether the Australian Labor Party supported the Government amendment , but during Senator Natasha Stott Despoja 's speech their opposition to the amendment was made clear.
Revised: ]". There was confusion to whether the Australian Labor Party supported the Government amendment . Senator Natasha Stott Despoja 's speech their opposition to the amendment was made clear.
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Original: ]". There was confusion to whether the Australian Labor Party supported the Government amendment , but during Senator Natasha Stott Despoja 's speech their opposition to the amendment was made clear.
Revised: ]". There was confusion to whether the Australian Labor Party supported the Government amendment , but during Senator Natasha Stott Despoja made the Australian Democrat's opposition to the amendment was made clear.
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Original: ]". There was confusion to whether the Australian Labor Party supported the Government amendment , but during Senator Natasha Stott Despoja 's speech their opposition to the amendment was made clear.
Revised: ]". There was confusion to whether the Australian Labor Party supported the Government amendment , but during Senator Natasha Stott Despoja 's speech their opposition to the amendment clear.
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Original:  She had noted before that " What is wrong with this place?
Revised:  She said, " What is wrong with this place?
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Original:  She had noted before that " What is wrong with this place?
Revised:  She had noted before that " what is wrong with this place?
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Original:  If 'wimp' is considered inappropriate, I could say 'weak', 'timorous' or 'ineffectual'  " but later apologised to the Labor Party and redirected her criticism to the Government.
Revised:  If 'wimp' is considered inappropriate, I could say 'weak', 'timorous' or 'ineffectual' . " but later apologised to the Labor Party and redirected her criticism to the Government.
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Original:  If 'wimp' is considered inappropriate, I could say 'weak', 'timorous' or 'ineffectual'  " but later apologised to the Labor Party and redirected her criticism to the Government.
Revised:  If 'wimp' is considered inappropriate, I could say 'weak', 'timorous' or 'ineffectual' " She later apologised to the Labor Party and redirected her criticism to the Government.
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Original:  Senator Ellison had noted later that " When you look at international instruments, you do not often find the language of emotion.
Revised:  Senator Ellison said, " When you look at international instruments, you do not often find the language of emotion.
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Original:  Senator Ellison had noted later that " When you look at international instruments, you do not often find the language of emotion.
Revised:  Senator Ellison had noted later that " when you look at international instruments, you do not often find the language of emotion.
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Original:  " and that " We should not bring emotion into the debate which could well hamper other efforts being made in relation to the Van Nguyen matter."
Revised:  .. We should not bring emotion into the debate which could well hamper other efforts being made in relation to the Van Nguyen matter."
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Original:  A division on the amendment was called and the motion was amended in the Government's favour  34 to 30.
Revised:  A division on the amendment was called and the motion was amended in the Government's favour , 34 to 30.
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Original:  The motion as amendment was carried on the voices ( without having to resort to a divison)
Revised:  The amended motion was carried on the voices ( without having to resort to a divison)
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Original:  The motion as amendment was carried on the voices ( without having to resort to a divison)
Revised:  The motion as amendment was carried on the voices , without having to resort to a divison)
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Original:  The motion as amendment was carried on the voices ( without having to resort to a divison)
Revised:  The motion as amendment was carried on the voices ( without having to resort to a division
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Original:  The amended motion was carried on the voices, without having to resort to a division
Revised:  The amended motion was the carried
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Original:  The 25-year-old Australian man was convicted of trafficking 396 grams of heroin through Singapore.
Revised:  The 25-year-old Australian salesman was convicted of trafficking 396 grams of heroin through Singapore.
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Original:  The motion, as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown  of the Australian Greens, expressed the government's "abhorrence of the death penalty."
Revised:  The motion, as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown , leader of the Australian Greens, expressed the government's "abhorrence of the death penalty."
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Original:  Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this.
Revised:  Greens members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this.
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Original:  Greens leader, Senator Brown, said, " should we just say 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it'...
Revised:  " should we just say 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it'...
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Original:  Greens leader, Senator Brown, said, " should we just say 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it'...
Revised:  Greens leader, Senator Brown, said, " Should we just say 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it'...
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Original: ]"  .  Senator Natasha Stott Despoja made the Australian Democrat's opposition to the amendment clear.
Revised: ]" . Australian Democrat's Senator Natasha Stott Despoja made the Australian Democrat's opposition to the amendment clear.
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Original: ]"  .  Senator Natasha Stott Despoja made the Australian Democrat's opposition to the amendment clear.
Revised: ]" . Senator Natasha Stott Despoja made her opposition to the amendment clear.
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Original:  She said, " what is wrong with this place?
Revised:  " what is wrong with this place?
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Original:  She said, " what is wrong with this place?
Revised:  She said, " What is wrong with this place?
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Original:  If 'wimp' is considered inappropriate, I could say 'weak', 'timorous' or 'ineffectual' . "  She later apologised to the Labor Party and redirected her criticism to the Government.
Revised:  If 'wimp' is considered inappropriate, I could say 'weak', 'timorous' or 'ineffectual' , " She later apologised to the Labor Party and redirected her criticism to the Government.
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Original:  If 'wimp' is considered inappropriate, I could say 'weak', 'timorous' or 'ineffectual' . "  She later apologised to the Labor Party and redirected her criticism to the Government.
Revised:  If 'wimp' is considered inappropriate, I could say 'weak', 'timorous' or 'ineffectual' . " she said. She later apologised to the Labor Party and redirected her criticism to the Government.
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Original: This Monday, Google added "+1" button to its search results.
Revised: On Monday, Google added "+1" button to its search results.
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Original:  Today on June 29, Google plans to possibly add the "+1" button to its text ads, globally known as "AdWords", in the future.
Revised:  Google also plans to possibly add the "+1" button to its text ads, globally known as "AdWords", in the future.
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Original:  On Monday, Google added  "+1" button to its search results.
Revised:  On Monday, Google added the "+1" button to its search results.
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Original:  Two days later on Wednesday, Google started planning to add it to the text ads, globally known as " AdSense ".
Revised:  Today, Google began planning to add it to the text ads, globally known as " AdSense ".
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Original:  Two days later on Wednesday, Google started planning to add it to the text ads, globally known as " AdSense ".
Revised:  Two days later on Wednesday, Google started planning to add it to text ads, globally known as " AdSense ".
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Original:  Two days later on Wednesday, Google started planning to add it to the text ads, globally known as " AdSense ".
Revised:  Two days later on Wednesday, Google started planning to add it to the text ads, globally known as " ".
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Original:  At that day, Google Product Manager Nick Radicevic made a comment at the Google's AdSense blog: "Today, +1's will start appearing on Google search pages globally. ....
Revised:  Google Product Manager Nick Radicevic made a comment at the Google's AdSense blog: "Today, +1's will start appearing on Google search pages globally. ....
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Original:  At that day, Google Product Manager Nick Radicevic made a comment at the Google's AdSense blog: "Today, +1's will start appearing on Google search pages globally. ....
Revised:  At that day, Google Product Manager Nick Radicevic commented at the Google's AdSense blog: "Today, +1's will start appearing on Google search pages globally. ....
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Original:  If it is popular, a large number of readers can click the button to have the site step in closer to the top of search results.
Revised:  If it is popular, a large number of readers can click the button to have the site move higher in search results.
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Original:  People with a Google account can add a "+1" button to their website .
Revised:  People with a Google account can add a "+1" button to their personal websites .
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Original:  Google also plans to possibly add the "+1" button to its text ads, globally known as "AdWords" , in the future .
Revised:  Google also plans to eventually add the "+1" button to its text ads, globally known as "AdWords" , in the future .
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Original:  Google also plans to possibly add the "+1" button to its text ads, globally known as "AdWords" , in the future .
Revised:  Google also plans to possibly add the "+1" button to its text ads, globally known as "AdWords" .
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Original: Google Product Manager Nick Radicevic commented at the Google's AdSense blog: "Today, +1's will start appearing on Google search pages globally. ....
Revised: Google Product Manager Nick Radicevic commented at Google's AdSense blog: "Today, +1's will start appearing on Google search pages globally. ....
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Original:  If it is popular, a large number of readers can click the button to have the site move higher in search results.
Revised:  If a large number of readers can click the button to have the site move higher in search results.
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Original:  If it is popular, a large number of readers can click the button to have the site move higher in search results.
Revised:  If it is popular, a large number of readers click the button to have the site move higher in search results.
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Original:  If it is popular, a large number of readers can click the button to have the site move higher in search results.
Revised:  If it is popular, a large number of readers can click the button , the site will move closer to the top in Google search results.
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Original:  Google also plans to eventually add the "+1" button to its text ads , globally known as " AdWords ". A user would be able to add rank to an ad and optionally make it available at their Google profile.
Revised:  Google also plans to eventually add the "+1" button to its text advertisements , globally known as " AdWords ". A user would be able to add rank to an ad and optionally make it available at their Google profile.
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Original:  Google also plans to eventually add the "+1" button to its text ads , globally known as " AdWords ". A user would be able to add rank to an ad and optionally make it available at their Google profile.
Revised:  Google also plans to eventually add the "+1" button to its text ads , globally known as " ". A user would be able to add rank to an ad and optionally make it available at their Google profile.
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Original:  Google expects the experiment to be useful to improve search results in the future and to combat poor websites and .
Revised:  Google expects the experiment to be useful to improve search results and to combat poor websites and .
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Original:  Currently almost half of American high school students smoke, drink alcohol or use other drugs, according to the study and 75\% of all high school students have used addictive substances including tobacco, alcohol, marijuana or cocaine , while 1 in 5 meets the    .
Revised:  Currently almost half of American high school students smoke, drink alcohol or use other drugs, according to the study and 75\% of all high school students have used addictive substances including tobacco, alcohol, marijuana or cocaine , while 1 in 5 meets the . .
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Original:  CASA also found that 90\% of adults who have started using substances before the age of 18.
Revised: According to the study's authors, "The study looks at how American culture increases the risk that teens will use addictive substances and how the messages sent by adults, and glamorized by the tobacco and alcohol industries and the media, normalize substance use and undermine the health and futures of our teens." CASA also found that 90\% of adults who have started using substances before the age of 18.
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Original:  According to the researchers,"The study looks at how American culture increases the risk that teens will use addictive substances and how the messages sent by adults, and glamorized by the tobacco and alcohol industries and the media, normalize substance use and undermine the health and futures of our teens."
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Original: CASA also found that 90\% of adults who have started using substances before the age of 18.
Revised: CASA found that 90\% of adults who have started using substances before the age of 18.
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Original: The study's authors pointed out that the teenage brain is not fully developed and the use of drugs during the teenage years hampers brain development , impairs judgment and increases the risk of addiction as an adult.
Revised: The study's authors pointed out that the teenage brain is not fully developed and the use of drugs during the teenage years hampers further development of the brain , impairs judgment and increases the risk of addiction as an adult.
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Original:  Heavy substance abuse harms the developing brain far more than the  developed adult brain.
Revised:  Heavy substance abuse harms the developing brain far more than the already developed adult brain.
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Original:  A report issued Wednesday by the (CASA) at finds the top problem in the United States is teen , including the use of and , , , and the use of illegal drugs .
Revised:  A report issued Wednesday by the (CASA) at finds the top problem in the United States is teen , including the use of , , , and the use of illegal drugs .
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Original:  A report issued Wednesday by the (CASA) at finds the top problem in the United States is teen , including the use of and , , , and the use of illegal drugs .
Revised:  A report issued Wednesday by the (CASA) at finds the top problem in the United States is teen , including the use of and , , , and other s .
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Original:  Currently almost half of American high school students smoke, drink alcohol or use other drugs, according to the study  and 1 in 5 meets the .
Revised:  Currently almost half of American high school students smoke, drink alcohol or use other drugs, according to the study , and 1 in 5 meets the .
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Original:  Currently almost half of American high school students smoke, drink alcohol or use other drugs, according to the study  and 1 in 5 meets the .
Revised:  Currently almost half of American high school students smoke, drink alcohol or use other drugs, according to the study and 1 in 5 meet the .
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Original:  Along with his wife, Jan Berenstain, they have published over 200 books aimed at teaching children to read and helping them with moral lessons such as sh .
Revised:  Along with his wife, Jan Berenstain, they have published over 200 books aimed at teaching children to read and helping them with lessons such as sh .
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Original: Stan Berenstain, Co-creator of the poular Berenstain Bears children's books , has died due to complications from cancer at age 82.
Revised: Stan Berenstain, Co-creator of the popular Berenstain Bears children's books , has died due to complications from cancer at age 82.
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Original: Stan Berenstain, Co-creator of the popular Berenstain Bears children's books, has died due to complications from cancer at age 82.
Revised: Stan Berenstain, co-creator of the popular Berenstain Bears children's books, has died due to complications from cancer at age 82.
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Original:  Along with his wife, Jan Berenstain, they have published over 200 books aimed at teaching children to read and helping them with lessons such as sharing, new siblings .. .
Revised:  Along with his wife, Jan Berenstain, they published over 200 books aimed at teaching children to read and helping them with lessons such as sharing, new siblings .. .
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Original:  Along with his wife, Jan Berenstain, they have published over 200 books aimed at teaching children to read and helping them with lessons such as sharing, new siblings .. .
Revised:  Along with his wife, Jan Berenstain, they have published over 200 books aimed at teaching children to read and helping them with lessons such as sharing, new siblings .
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