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Original:  Allardyce joined Crystal Palace after he was sacked from England's manager in ten weeks of penning a two-year contract .
Revised:  Allardyce joined Crystal Palace after he was sacked from England's manager ten weeks into the position .
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Original: Former England 's manager is a favourable candidate for the vacated spot.
Revised: Former England manager was immediately favoured for the vacated spot.
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Original:  Crystal Palace had six permanent managers in the last six years. de Boer has the smallest tenure as a manager of  English club in terms of matches — four Premier League matches, and five in total. de Boer's last match for Crystal Palace ended in a 1–0 defeat against Burnley.
Revised:  Crystal Palace had six permanent managers in the last six years. de Boer had the smallest tenure as a manager of English club in terms of matches — four Premier League matches, and five in total. de Boer's last match for Crystal Palace ended in a 1–0 defeat against Burnley.
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Original:  Crystal Palace had six permanent managers in the last six years. de Boer has the smallest tenure as a manager of  English club in terms of matches — four Premier League matches, and five in total. de Boer's last match for Crystal Palace ended in a 1–0 defeat against Burnley.
Revised:  Crystal Palace had six permanent managers in the last six years. de Boer has the smallest tenure as a manager of an English club in terms of matches — four Premier League matches, and five in total. de Boer's last match for Crystal Palace ended in a 1–0 defeat against Burnley.
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Original:  Crystal Palace had six permanent managers in the last six years. de Boer had the smallest tenure as a manager of an English club in terms of matches — four Premier League matches, and five in total. de Boer's last match for Crystal Palace ended in a 1–0 defeat against Burnley.
Revised:  Crystal Palace had six permanent managers in the last six years. de Boer had the fewest matches in a management tenure of an English club in terms of matches — four Premier League matches, and five in total. de Boer's last match for Crystal Palace ended in a 1–0 defeat against Burnley.
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Original:  Crystal Palace had six permanent managers in the last six years. de Boer had the smallest tenure as a manager of an English club in terms of matches — four Premier League matches, and five in total. de Boer's last match for Crystal Palace ended in a 1–0 defeat against Burnley.
Revised:  Crystal Palace had six permanent managers in the last six years. de Boer had the smallest tenure as a manager of an English club — four Premier League matches, and five in total. de Boer's last match for Crystal Palace ended in a 1–0 defeat against Burnley.
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Original: A police officer has shot and killed his wife and their two children at the train station in the city of , in the department of , after she had informed him of her intention to separate from him.
Revised: A police officer has shot and killed his wife and their two children at the train station in the city of in the department of , after she had informed him of her intention to separate from him.
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Original: A police officer has shot and killed his wife and their two children at the train station in the city of in the department of , the local said, after the wife had informed the officer of her intention to separate from him.
Revised: A police officer has shot and killed his wife and two of their children at the train station in the city of in the department of , the local said, after the wife had informed the officer of her intention to separate from him.
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Original: The wife, born in 1983, had called the gendarmes (police) in the morning, and they arrived to find her explaining to their five children about the domestic argument which had escalated.
Revised: The wife, born in 1983, called the gendarmes (police) in the morning, and they arrived to find her explaining to their five children about the domestic argument which had escalated.
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Original:  The woman informed the gendarmes of her decision to leave her house when her husband was not there .
Revised:  The woman reportedly chose to leave her house when her husband was not there .
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Original:  There is an active search for a witness who escaped after observing the events
Revised:  Late on Sunday, the police were searching for a witness who escaped after observing the events
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Original:  The  family lived in , near Noyon.
Revised:  The wife's family lived in , near Noyon.
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Original:  The station at Noyon was closed after the incident , the train held for a long time in the station . Late on Sunday, the police were searching for a witness who escaped after observing the events
Revised:  The station at Noyon was closed after the incident . Late on Sunday, the police were searching for a witness who escaped after observing the events
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Original: ◎⑨④⑤③④③⑦⑨②①news global A police officer has shot and killed his wife and two of their children at the train station in the city of in the department of , the local said, after the wife had informed the officer of her intention to separate from him.
Revised:  A police officer has shot and killed his wife and two of their children at the train station in the city of in the department of , the local said, after the wife had informed the officer of her intention to separate from him.
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Original:  The UK has given up € 10.5 bn in exchange for a review of farm subsidies in 2008-09 
Revised:  The UK has given up 10.5 bn in exchange for a review of farm subsidies in 2008-09 
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Original:  The UK has given up € 10.5 bn in exchange for a review of farm subsidies in 2008-09 
Revised:  The UK has given up € 10.5 billion euros in exchange for a review of farm subsidies in 2008-09 
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Original:  The UK has given up 10.5 billion euros in exchange for a review of farm subsidies in 2008-09, though total UK's membership discount increases . Small member states such as Sweden became even larger net payer 
Revised:  The UK has given up 10.5 billion euros in exchange for a review of farm subsidies in 2008-2009, but the net membership discount will actually increase . Small member states such as Sweden became even larger net payer 
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Original:  The biggest issues were different views between France, UK and rest of the Europe .
Revised:  The biggest issues were different views between France, UK and rest of the EU .
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Original:  Most see the resulted budget as a poor comproromise, but necessarily for the state of union and new member state
Revised:  Most see the resulted budget as a poor comproromise, but necessarily for the state of union and financial planning in the new member states
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Original:  Negotioations were characterized by host country's prime minister Tony Blair as 'extraordinarily complicated' .
Revised:  Negotiations were characterized by host country's prime minister Tony Blair as 'extraordinarily complicated' .
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Original:  Negotioations were characterized by host country's prime minister Tony Blair as 'extraordinarily complicated' .
Revised:  Negotioations were characterized by host country's Prime Minister Tony Blair as 'extraordinarily complicated' .
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Original:  Negotioations were characterized by host country's prime minister Tony Blair as 'extraordinarily complicated' .
Revised:  Negotioations were characterized by host country's prime minister Tony Blair as "extraordinarily complicated" .
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Original:  The biggest issues were different views between France,  UK and rest of the EU.
Revised:  The biggest issues were different views between France, the UK and rest of the EU.
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Original: France continues to receive it's highly critized subsidies.
Revised: France continues to receive it's highly criticized subsidies.
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Original:  Since then, Marcelo has won four Spanish LaLiga titles and thre UEFA Champions League titles.
Revised:  Since then, Marcelo has won four Spanish LaLiga titles and three UEFA Champions League titles.
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Original:  Since joining the club at age eighteen, Marcelo has won a total of seventeen titles with Real Madrid including three s , three Spanish Super Cups — — and two each of and w|FIFA Club World Cup . During his tenure at the Santiago Bernabéu, Marcelo has featured in 415 matches for the club, and is also serves as the vice-captain of the team.
Revised:  Since joining the club at age eighteen, Marcelo has won a total of seventeen titles with Real Madrid including three , three Spanish Super Cups — — and two each of and w|FIFA Club World Cup . During his tenure at the Santiago Bernabéu, Marcelo has featured in 415 matches for the club, and is also serves as the vice-captain of the team.
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Original:  Since joining the club at age eighteen, Marcelo has won a total of seventeen titles with Real Madrid including three s , three Spanish Super Cups — — and two each of and w|FIFA Club World Cup . During his tenure at the Santiago Bernabéu, Marcelo has featured in 415 matches for the club, and is also serves as the vice-captain of the team.
Revised:  Since joining the club at age eighteen, Marcelo has won a total of seventeen titles with Real Madrid including three s , three Spanish Super Cups — — and two each of and . During his tenure at the Santiago Bernabéu, Marcelo has featured in 415 matches for the club, and is also serves as the vice-captain of the team.
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Original: On Wednesday , Brazilian footballer signed a contract extension with Spanish capital club Real Madrid, the club announced via their official website.
Revised: yesterday , Brazilian footballer signed a contract extension with Spanish capital club Real Madrid, the club announced via their official website.
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Original: Since joining the club at age eighteen, Marcelo has won a total of seventeen titles with Real Madrid including three , three Spanish Super Cups — — and two each of and . During his tenure at the Santiago Bernabéu , Marcelo has featured in 415 matches for the club, and is also serves as the vice-captain of the team.
Revised: Since joining the club at age eighteen, Marcelo has won a total of seventeen titles with Real Madrid including three , three Spanish Super Cups — — and two each of and . During his tenure at the , Marcelo has featured in 415 matches for the club, and is also serves as the vice-captain of the team.
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Original: Since joining the club at age eighteen, Marcelo has won a total of seventeen titles with Real Madrid including three , three Spanish Super Cups — — and two each of and . During his tenure at the , Marcelo has featured in 415 matches for the club, and is also serves as the vice-captain of the team.
Revised: Since joining the club at age eighteen, Marcelo has won a total of seventeen titles with Real Madrid including three , three Spanish Super Cups — — and two each of and . During his tenure at the , Marcelo has featured in 415 matches for the club, and also serves as the vice-captain of the team.
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Original:  Only Roberto Carlos, his compatriot has more appearances as a foreign player for Real Madrid with 527 caps.
Revised:  Only his compatriot has more appearances as a foreign player for Real Madrid with 527 caps.
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Original:  Only his compatriot has more appearances as a foreign player for Real Madrid with 527 caps . Due to the suspension in the previous league game, Marcelo is to miss upcoming matches against and .
Revised:  Only his compatriot has more appearances as a foreign player for Real Madrid with 527 matches . Due to the suspension in the previous league game, Marcelo is to miss upcoming matches against and .
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Original:  Last, year, German midfielder Toni Kroos and Welsh midfielder Gareth Bale signed contract extensions with Madrid which also runs until June 2022.
Revised:  Last, year, German midfielder Toni Kroos and Welsh midfielder Gareth Bale signed contract extensions with Madrid which also run until June 2022.
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Original: yesterday , Brazilian footballer signed a contract extension with Spanish capital club Real Madrid, the club announced via their official website.
Revised: Yesterday , Brazilian footballer signed a contract extension with Spanish capital club Real Madrid, the club announced via their official website.
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Original:  The explosion has been confirmed to have been caused by an placed in a white bucket inside a shopping bag.
Revised:  The explosion has been confirmed caused by an placed in a white bucket inside a shopping bag.
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Original:  Reports also indicate the device had a timer attached  .
Revised:  Reports also indicate a timer attached .
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Original:  Officers and ambulance staff are on the scene  , with reports of burn and crush injuries.
Revised:  Officers and ambulance staff were on the scene , with reports of burn and crush injuries.
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Original:  Hundreds of detectives and MI5 are already searching for the unknown person or persons , but no details regarding their identity were released.
Revised:  Detectives and MI5 are already searching for the unknown person or persons , but no details regarding their identity were released.
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Original:  Hundreds of detectives and MI5 are already searching for the unknown person or persons , but no details regarding their identity were released.
Revised:  Hundreds of detectives and MI5 were already searching for the unknown person or persons , but no details regarding their identity were released.
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Original:  Hundreds of detectives and MI5 are already searching for the unknown person or persons , but no details regarding their identity were released.
Revised:  Hundreds of detectives and MI5 are already searching for unknown person or persons , but no details regarding their identity were released.
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Original:  Hundreds of detectives and MI5 are already searching for the unknown person or persons , but no details regarding their identity were released.
Revised:  Hundreds of detectives and MI5 are already searching for the unknown person or persons ; no details regarding their identity were released.
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Original:  BBC News presenter says she saw a woman on a stretcher with burns to her face and legs .
Revised:  BBC News presenter described seeing a woman on a stretcher with burns to her face and legs .
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Original:  BBC News presenter says she saw a woman on a stretcher with burns to her face and legs .
Revised:  BBC News presenter says she saw a woman on a stretcher with face and leg burns .
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Original:  The explosion has been  confirmed caused by an placed in a white bucket inside a shopping bag.
Revised:  The explosion has been officially confirmed caused by an placed in a white bucket inside a shopping bag.
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Original:  Isco had won the in 2013 with Spain, scoring a goal in the final against Italy.
Revised:  Isco won the in 2013 with Spain, scoring a goal in the final against Italy.
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Original:  Isco has 22 international , and has netted six goals.
Revised:  Isco has 22 international , netting six goals.
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Original:  Madrid had announced about agreeing for contract extension with Isco yesterday .
Revised:  Madrid announced about agreeing for contract extension with Isco yesterday .
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Original: Per the previous contract, Isco was tied with the club until June 2018.
Revised: Per the previous contract, Isco was tied to Real Madrid until June 2018.
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Original:  They join other Real Madrid players including German midfielder and Welsh midfielder whose contract run until June 2022.
Revised:  They join other Real Madrid players including German midfielder and Welsh midfielder whose contracts run until June 2022.
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Original:  Kroos and Bale signed contract extension last year.
Revised:  Kroos and Bale signed contract extensions last year.
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Original:  This August, Isco scored a goal against Manchester United in the which was Real Madrid's latest addition to their trophy cabinet .
Revised:  This August, Isco scored a goal against Manchester United in the .
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Original: On Monday, Qatar-based news network 's Acting Director General Mostefa Souag said 's actions were "alarming and worrying" after the US-based messaging and media sharing platform blocked their channel from  discover publisher section in Saudi Arabia following request from the Saudi government.
Revised: On Monday, Qatar-based news network 's Acting Director General Mostefa Souag said 's actions were "alarming and worrying" after the US-based messaging and media sharing platform blocked their channel from the discover publisher section in Saudi Arabia following request from the Saudi government.
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Original:  The block was introduced on Sunday, and the Saudi government accused Al Jazeera for cyber crimes and for their content , which violated "local laws " of the kingdom.
Revised:  The block was introduced on Sunday, and the Saudi government accused Al Jazeera of content violating cyber crime laws of the kingdom.
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Original: Mostefa Souag said Snapchat's actions "sends a message that regimes and countries can silence any voice or platform they don't agree with by exerting pressure on the owners of social media platforms and content distribution companies.
Revised: Mostefa Souag said Snapchat's action "sends a message that regimes and countries can silence any voice or platform they don't agree with by exerting pressure on the owners of social media platforms and content distribution companies.
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Original:  Al Jazeera's content can be accessed by Saudi's outside the discover channel  . Snap, Inc. said the channel's content is available in fourteen Middle Eastern countries.
Revised:  Al Jazeera's Snapchat content outside the discover channel . Snap, Inc. said the channel's content is available in fourteen Middle Eastern countries.
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Original: Al Jazeera was blocked in Saudi  and the UAE on May 24, accusing the media company for publishing "fake news".
Revised: Al Jazeera was blocked in Saudi Arabia and the UAE on May 24, accusing the media company for publishing "fake news".
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Original: Al Jazeera was blocked in Saudi Arabia and the UAE on May24, accusing the media company for publishing "fake news" . Four countries, Bahrain, Egypt, Saudi  , and the UAE broker their diplomatic ties with Qatar for allegedly supporting "extremists".
Revised: Al Jazeera was blocked in Saudi Arabia and the UAE on May24, accusing the media company for publishing "fake news" . Four countries, Bahrain, Egypt, Saudi Arabia , and the UAE broker their diplomatic ties with Qatar for allegedly supporting "extremists".
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Original: Al Jazeera was blocked in Saudi Arabia and the UAE on May24, accusing the media company for publishing "fake news" . Four countries, Bahrain, Egypt, Saudi  , and the UAE broker their diplomatic ties with Qatar for allegedly supporting "extremists".
Revised: Al Jazeera was blocked in Saudi Arabia and the UAE on May24, accusing the media company for publishing "fake news" . Four countries, Bahrain, Egypt, Saudi , and the UAE broke their diplomatic ties with Qatar for allegedly supporting "extremists".
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Original:  However, a spokesperson of the foreign ministry said those measures would not apply to Qatari students studying in Egyptian public universities, nor to partners or children of Egyptians , which came under effect from July 20.
Revised:  However, a spokesperson of the foreign ministry said those measures would not apply to Qatari students studying in Egyptian public universities, nor to partners or children of Egyptians .
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Original: Al Jazeera's head of Incubation and Innovation Research, Morad Rayyan  said, "We are urging them [Snapchat] to review the decision that was made.
Revised: Al Jazeera's head of Incubation and Innovation Research, Morad Rayyan , said, "We are urging them [Snapchat] to review the decision that was made.
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Original: Al Jazeera  was blocked in Saudi Arabia and the UAE in late May, amid controversy over remarks allegedly made by Qatar.
Revised: Al Jazeera 's website was blocked in Saudi Arabia and the UAE in late May, amid controversy over remarks allegedly made by Qatar.
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Original:  His of the of his left foot was treated on Tuesday by Dr. Ulrich Stöckle in .
Revised:  His of the of his left foot was treated on Tuesday by Doctor Ulrich Stöckle in .
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Original: Former goalie , who had played only twelve games since joining Bayern in 2015 until Monday  is likely to fill Neuer's place until Neuer returns.
Revised: Former goalie , who played only twelve games since joining Bayern in 2015 until Monday is likely to fill Neuer's place until Neuer returns.
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Original: Former goalie , who had played only twelve games since joining Bayern in 2015 until Monday  is likely to fill Neuer's place until Neuer returns.
Revised: Former goalie , who had played only twelve games since joining Bayern in 2015 until Monday , is likely to fill Neuer's place until Neuer returns.
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Original:  FC Barcelona's shotstopper is expected to guard the German nets for  upcoming FIFA World Cup qualifiers for next year's tournament in Russia.
Revised:  FC Barcelona's shotstopper is expected to guard the German nets for the upcoming FIFA World Cup qualifiers for next year's tournament in Russia.
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Original:  FC Barcelona's shotstopper is expected to guard the German nets for the upcoming FIFA World Cup qualifiers for next year's tournament in Russia.
Revised:  FC Barcelona's shotstopper is expected to guard the German nets for the upcoming qualifiers for next year's tournament in Russia.
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Original:  His club and national teammates including , , , , , and wish him a speedy recovery via Twitter
Revised:  His club and national teammates including , , , , , and wish him a speedy recovery via 
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Original:  His club and national teammates including , , , , , and wish him a speedy recovery via
Revised:  His club and national teammates including , , , , , and wished him a speedy recovery via
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Original:  His club and national teammates including , , , , , and wished him a speedy recovery via 
Revised:  His club and national teammates including , , , , , and wished him a speedy recovery via Twitter
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Original:  FC Barcelona's shotstopper Marc-André ter Stegen is expected to guard the German nets for the upcoming FIFA World Cup qualifiers for next year's tournament in Russia.
Revised:  FC Barcelona's shotstopper is expected to guard the German nets for the upcoming FIFA World Cup qualifiers for next year's tournament in Russia.
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Original:  FC Barcelona's shotstopper Marc-André ter Stegen is expected to guard the German nets for the upcoming FIFA World Cup qualifiers for next year's tournament in Russia.
Revised:  FC Barcelona's shotstopper Marc-André ter Stegen is expected to guard the German nets for the upcoming FIFA qualifiers for next year's tournament in Russia.
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Original: Mayor Michael Bloomberg questioned the good faith of the TWU, noting that had the union begun its strike this morning, it would not have been as disruptive to the work week as a Tuesday-morning strike.
Revised: Mayor Michael Bloomberg commented that had the union begun its strike this morning, it would not have been as disruptive to the work week as a Tuesday-morning strike.
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