wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  He was sure that the they wouldn't happen in absence of the Moon.
Revised:  He was sure that they wouldn't happen in absence of the Moon.
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Original: As Prof. Fernández-Duque explained, "The behavioral outcome for these owl monkeys is nocturnal activity maximized during relatively warm, moonlit nights.
Revised: As Fernández-Duque explained, "The behavioral outcome for these owl monkeys is nocturnal activity maximized during relatively warm, moonlit nights.
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Original: Lead investigator and assistant professor in the Department of Anthropology in Pennsylvania's School of Art and Sciences , Eduardo Fernández-Duque, explained that many animals change their activity levels with changes in environmental conditions.
Revised: Lead investigator and assistant professor in U.Penn.'s Department of Anthropology , Eduardo Fernández-Duque, explained that many animals change their activity levels with changes in environmental conditions.
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Original: A man from North London is currently training for an attempt at flying a hang glider across the UK from land's End to John O'Groats.
Revised: A man from North London is training to fly a hang glider across the UK from land's End to John O'Groats.
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Original:  Shola Ogunlokun  a 41 year old married father of 3 who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge said yesterday "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
Revised:  Shola Ogunlokun , a 41 year old married father of 3 who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge said yesterday "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
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Original:  Shola Ogunlokun  a 41 year old married father of 3 who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge said yesterday "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
Revised:  Shola Ogunlokun a 41 year old married father of three who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge said yesterday "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
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Original:  Shola Ogunlokun  a 41 year old married father of 3 who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge said yesterday "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
Revised:  Shola Ogunlokun a 41 year old married father of 3 who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge , said yesterday: "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
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Original:  Shola is on stage 2 of a 3 stage training programme, and has flown a glider off a 2000ft mountain on completion of stage 1 of his training.
Revised:  Shola is on stage two of a three stage training programme, and has flown a glider off a 2000ft mountain on completion of stage 1 of his training.
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Original:  Shola is on stage 2 of a 3 stage training programme, and has flown a glider off a 2000ft mountain on completion of stage 1 of his training.
Revised:  Shola is on stage 2 of a 3 stage training programme, and has flown a glider off a 2000ft mountain on completion of stage one of his training.
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Original:  He is currently looking for sponsors and in talks with a TV production about making a documentary of his attempt.
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Original:  The flight attempt is currently planned for around Autumn next year, should take between 5-7 days, and Shola would like to spend the night of each flight at the home of a local in the town he lands.
Revised:  The flight attempt is currently planned for around autumn next year, should take between 5-7 days, and Shola would like to spend the night of each flight at the home of a local in the town he lands.
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Original:  The flight attempt is currently planned for around Autumn next year, should take between 5-7 days, and Shola would like to spend the night of each flight at the home of a local in the town he lands.
Revised:  The flight attempt is currently planned for around Autumn next year, should take between 5-7 days, and Shola hopes to spend the night of each flight at the home of a local in the town he lands.
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Original:  Shola has an online diary charting his progress at URL For further details, sponsorship or to contact Shola, please visit his website: UR
Revised:  Shola has an online diary charting his progress at UR
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Original: A man from North London is training to fly a hang glider across the UK from land's End to John O'Groats.
Revised: A man from North London is currently training for an attempt at flying a hang glider across the UK from land's End to John O'Groats.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Shola Ogunlokun , a 41 year old married father of three who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge , said yesterday : "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
Revised:  Shola Ogunlokun a 41 year old married father of three who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge , said yesterday : "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
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Original:  Shola Ogunlokun , a 41 year old married father of three who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge , said yesterday : "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
Revised:  Shola Ogunlokun , a 41 year old married father of 3 who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge , said yesterday : "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
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Original:  Shola Ogunlokun , a 41 year old married father of three who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge , said yesterday : "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
Revised:  Shola Ogunlokun , a 41 year old married father of three who had never flown a hang glider before taking up this challenge said yesterday "I aim to fulfil a dream of flying, use the challenge as an opportunity to meet the people of Britain and encourage people of similar ethnic backgrounds as me to pursue their dreams".
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Original:  Shola is on stage two of a three stage training programme, and has flown a glider off a 2000ft mountain on completion of stage one of his training.
Revised:  Shola is on stage 2 of a 3 stage training programme, and has flown a glider off a 2000ft mountain on completion of stage one of his training.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Shola is on stage two of a three stage training programme, and has flown a glider off a 2000ft mountain on completion of stage one of his training.
Revised:  Shola is on stage two of a three stage training programme, and has flown a glider off a 2000ft mountain on completion of stage 1 of his training.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:   The flight attempt is currently planned for around autumn next year, should take between 5-7 days, and Shola hopes to spend the night of each flight at the home of a local in the town he lands.
Revised:  The flight attempt is currently planned for around Autumn next year, should take between 5-7 days, and Shola hopes to spend the night of each flight at the home of a local in the town he lands.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:   The flight attempt is currently planned for around autumn next year, should take between 5-7 days, and Shola hopes to spend the night of each flight at the home of a local in the town he lands.
Revised:  The flight attempt is currently planned for around autumn next year, should take between 5-7 days, and Shola would like to spend the night of each flight at the home of a local in the town he lands.
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Original: Gas prices are shooting over $3.50 per gallon  late Friday morning in the Northeast US.
Revised: Gas prices have shot up to over $3.50 per gallon late Friday morning in the Northeast US.
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Original: Gas prices are shooting over $3.50 per gallon  late Friday morning in the Northeast US.
Revised: Gas prices are shooting over $3.50 per gallon , late Friday morning in the Northeast US.
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Original:  People are rushing to fill their tanks as some stations are reporting shortages of gasoline, and many oil wells were forced to shut down after Hurricane Katrina  
Revised:  People are rushing to fill their tanks as some stations are reporting shortages of gasoline, and many oil wells were forced to shut down after Hurricane Katrina . 
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Original: The ETA (Euskadi Ta Askatasuna), the separatist group based out of the Basque region of Northern Spain, announced in a recorded and written message that it would end its armed campaign for independence, instead focusing on political means for achieving its goals.
Revised:  ETA (Euskadi Ta Askatasuna), the separatist group based out of the Basque region of Northern Spain, announced in a recorded and written message that it would end its armed campaign for independence, instead focusing on political means for achieving its goals.
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Original: The ETA (Euskadi Ta Askatasuna), the separatist group based out of the Basque region of Northern Spain, announced in a recorded and written message that it would end its armed campaign for independence, instead focusing on political means for achieving its goals.
Revised: The ETA (Euskadi Ta Askatasuna), a separatist group based out of the Basque region of Northern Spain, announced in a recorded and written message that it would end its armed campaign for independence, instead focusing on political means for achieving its goals.
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Original: The ETA (Euskadi Ta Askatasuna), the separatist group based out of the Basque region of Northern Spain, announced in a recorded and written message that it would end its armed campaign for independence, instead focusing on political means for achieving its goals.
Revised: The ETA (Euskadi Ta Askatasuna), the separatist group based out of the Basque region of northern Spain, announced in a recorded and written message that it would end its armed campaign for independence, instead focusing on political means for achieving its goals.
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Original:   In the video sent to the BBC, ETA stated that, while the autonomy framework enshrined in the Spanish constitution is "not the way to satisfy the wishes of the Basque people" it stated that it was committed to finding a democratic solution to the conflict.
Revised:  In the video sent to the BBC, ETA stated that, while the autonomy framework enshrined in the Spanish constitution is "not the way to satisfy the wishes of the Basque people" , that the organisation was committed to finding a democratic solution to the conflict.
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Original:  Several analysts have suggested that this most recent ceasefire is based on the fact that ETAs tactics have caused their support in the Basque region to plummet.
Revised:  Several analysts have suggested that this most recent ceasefire is based ETAs tactics have caused their support in the Basque region to plummet.
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Original:  Several analysts have suggested that this most recent ceasefire is based on the fact that ETAs tactics have caused their support in the Basque region to plummet.
Revised:  Several analysts have suggested that this most recent ceasefire is based on the fact that ETAs tactics have causing their support in the Basque region to plummet.
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Original:  Author Paddy Woodworth found in a recent trip to the region that the groups actions had made former supporters of the movement believe that the group was politically finished.
Revised:  Author Paddy Woodworth found in a recent trip to the region that the group's actions had made former supporters of the movement believe that the group was politically finished.
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Original:  The BBCs Sarah Rainsford said that ETA is at the weakest point in its 51-year history and that this may just be a ploy to disguise that weakness.
Revised:  The BBC's Sarah Rainsford said that ETA is at the weakest point in its 51-year history and that this may just be a ploy to disguise that weakness.
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Original:  The BBCs Sarah Rainsford said that ETA is at the weakest point in its 51-year history and that this may just be a ploy to disguise that weakness.
Revised:  The BBCs Sarah Rainsford said that ETA is at the weakest point in its 51-year history and that the ceasefire may just be a ploy to disguise that weakness.
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Original:  On September 6 the Spanish government rejected the ceasefire, saying that the group cannot be trusted after the last ceasefire, alleging that the group was calling the ceasefire because they were too weak to stage attacks, and that this was a way for them to regroup and rearm.
Revised:  On September 6 the Spanish government rejected the ceasefire, saying that the group cannot be trusted after the last ceasefire, alleging that the group was calling the ceasefire because they were too weak to stage attacks, and asserting the ceasefire is a way for them to regroup and rearm.
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Original:  Interior Minister Alfredo Perez Rubalcaba said Monday that the group would have to completely renounce violence for the government to accept the ceasefire
Revised:  Interior Minister Alfredo Pérez Rubalcaba said Monday that the group would have to completely renounce violence for the government to accept the ceasefire
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Original:  ]] US airline JetBlue announced Saturday that famed flight attendant Steven Slater resigned last week and is not currently employed by the company.
Revised:  ]] US airline JetBlue announced Saturday flight attendant Steven Slater resigned last week and is not currently employed by the company.
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Original:  Last month, the air carrier announced that Slater's flight attendant duties had been suspended.
Revised:  Last month, the air carrier announced Slater's flight attendant duties had been suspended.
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Original:  Last month, the air carrier announced that Slater's flight attendant duties had been suspended.
Revised:  Last month, the air carrier announced that Slater's duties had been suspended.
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Original:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in the form of a profanity-laced loudspeaker announcement and then exiting the plane via the emergency slide , beer in hand . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police Department (NYPD) for depolying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
Revised:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year-old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in the form of a profanity-laced loudspeaker announcement and then exiting the plane via the emergency slide , beer in hand . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police Department (NYPD) for depolying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
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Original:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in the form of a profanity-laced loudspeaker announcement and then exiting the plane via the emergency slide , beer in hand . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police Department (NYPD) for depolying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
Revised:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in a profane loudspeaker announcement and then exiting the plane via the emergency slide , beer in hand . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police Department (NYPD) for depolying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
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Original:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in the form of a profanity-laced loudspeaker announcement and then exiting the plane via the emergency slide , beer in hand . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police Department (NYPD) for depolying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
Revised:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in the form of a profanity-laced loudspeaker announcement and exited the plane on the emergency slide , beer in hand . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police Department (NYPD) for depolying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
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Original:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in the form of a profanity-laced loudspeaker announcement and then exiting the plane via the emergency slide , beer in hand . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police Department (NYPD) for depolying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
Revised:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in the form of a profanity-laced loudspeaker announcement and then exiting the plane via the emergency slide . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police Department (NYPD) for depolying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
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Original:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in the form of a profanity-laced loudspeaker announcement and then exiting the plane via the emergency slide , beer in hand . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police Department (NYPD) for depolying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
Revised:  On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in the form of a profanity-laced loudspeaker announcement and then exiting the plane via the emergency slide , beer in hand . Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangerment and criminal mischief by the New York Police for deploying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
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Original:  Slater has been charged with felony reckless endangermentand criminal mischief by the New York Police for deploying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
Revised:  Slater has been charged with "reckless endangerment" and "criminal mischief" by the New York Police for deploying the emergency slide, which could have crushed someone below.
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Original:  Slater has been charged with "reckless endangerment" and "criminal mischief" by the New York Police for deploying the emergency slide, which  could have crushed someone below.
Revised:  Slater has been charged with "reckless endangerment" and "criminal mischief" by the New York Police for deploying the emergency slide, which they say could have crushed someone below.
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Original:  ]] US airline JetBlue announced Saturday flight attendant Steven Slater resigned last week and is not currently employed by the company  . Last month, the air carrier announced Slater's duties had been suspended.
Revised:  ]] US airline JetBlue announced Saturday flight attendant Steven Slater is not currently employed by the company . Last month, the air carrier announced Slater's duties had been suspended.
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Original: On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year-old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in a profane loudspeaker announcement and exited the plane with two beers in hand on the emergency slide  . Slater has been charged with "reckless endangerment" and "criminal mischief" by the New York Police for deploying the emergency slide, which they say could have crushed someone below.
Revised: On August 9, the 38-year-old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in a profane loudspeaker announcement and exited the plane with two beers in hand on the emergency slide . Slater has been charged with "reckless endangerment" and "criminal mischief" by the New York Police for deploying the emergency slide, which they say could have crushed someone below.
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Original: On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year-old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in a profane loudspeaker announcement and exited the plane with two beers in hand on the emergency slide  . Slater has been charged with "reckless endangerment" and "criminal mischief" by the New York Police for deploying the emergency slide, which they say could have crushed someone below.
Revised: On August 9, after a dispute with a passenger in which the passenger hit Slater with her luggage, the 38-year-old Slater announced that he was quitting his job in a profane loudspeaker announcement and exited the plane with two beers in hand on the emergency slide . According to Slater, the incident was due to a rude female passenger hitting him in the head with her luggage. However, other passengers on the airplane dispute this explanation . Slater has been charged with "reckless endangerment" and "criminal mischief" by the New York Police for deploying the emergency slide, which they say could have crushed someone below.
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Original:  This law was first inacted in 2001, to help in the fight against AIDS, which was, and still is, at crisis levels.
Revised:  This law was first enacted in 2001, to help in the fight against AIDS, which was, and still is, at crisis levels.
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Original:  He has travelled internationally to try and raise money, increase awareness, and seek solutions to the epidemic.
Revised:  He has traveled internationally to try and raise money, increase awareness, and seek solutions to the epidemic.
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