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Original:  The report from the International Food Policy Research Institute says climate change will increase the global number of malnourished children by 25 million in the next 40 years.
Revised:  The report from the International Food Policy Research Institute projects that the the number of malnourished children by 25 million in the next 40 years.
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Original:  Three months ahead of climate change talks in Copenhagen, Denmark, Nelson says African governments should focus on helping their farmers adapt to climate change.
Revised:  Two months ahead of climate change talks in Copenhagen, Denmark, Nelson says African governments should focus on helping their farmers adapt to climate change.
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Original:  Two months ahead of climate change talks in Copenhagen, Denmark, Nelson says African governments should focus on helping their farmers adapt to climate change.
Revised:  With upcoming climate change talks in Copenhagen, Denmark, Nelson says African governments should focus on helping their farmers adapt to climate change.
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Original:   According to opinion polls, the Papandreou 's Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) appears to hold a lead over the conservative New Democracy (ND), which has been in power for five and a half years.
Revised:  According to opinion polls, the Papandreou Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) appears to hold a lead over the conservative New Democracy (ND), which has been in power for five and a half years.
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Original: Jarno Trulli took second place for the japanese Toyota team as Timo Glock had his leg injured in a qualifying accident on Saturday and withdrew from the race on Sunday morning.
Revised: Jarno Trulli took second place for the Japanese Toyota team as Timo Glock had his leg injured in a qualifying accident on Saturday and withdrew from the race on Sunday morning.
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Original: Jarno Trulli took second place for the japanese Toyota team as Timo Glock had his leg injured in a qualifying accident on Saturday and withdrew from the race on Sunday morning.
Revised: Jarno Trulli took second place for the japanese Toyota team as Timo Glock was injured in a qualifying accident on Saturday and withdrew from the race on Sunday morning.
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Original:  Ferrari driver Kimi Räikkönen managed to pass Nick Heidfeld from BMW Sauber to finish fourth  together with Nico Rosberg  (Williams).
Revised:  Ferrari driver Kimi Räikkönen managed to pass Nick Heidfeld from BMW Sauber to finish fourth , together with Nico Rosberg (Williams).
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Original:  Ferrari driver Kimi Räikkönen managed to pass Nick Heidfeld from BMW Sauber to finish fourth  together with Nico Rosberg  (Williams).
Revised:  Ferrari driver Kimi Räikkönen managed to pass Nick Heidfeld from BMW Sauber to finish fourth together with Nico Rosberg of (Williams).
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Original:  Red Bull is 35.5 points behind and the team also remain chances win the championship.
Revised:  Red Bull is 35.5 points behind , still giving the team a chance to win the championship.
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Original:  From other news this week is Fernando Alonso move from Renault to Ferrari next season.
Revised:  In other racing news this week is Fernando Alonso move from Renault to Ferrari next season.
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Original:  From other news this week is Fernando Alonso move from Renault to Ferrari next season.
Revised:  From other news this week , Fernando Alonso will move from team Renault to Ferrari next season.
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Original:  Contract will last for three years with an option to continue.
Revised:  His contract will last for three years with an option to continue.
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Original:  Fernando Alonso was very enthusiastic about his decision by confessing in an interview that "it would be even more special to win a championship with Ferrari...
Revised:  Alonso was very enthusiastic about his decision by confessing in an interview that "it would be even more special to win a championship with Ferrari...
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Original:  Räikkönen is now free to choose another team , and Alonso's teammate would be Felipe Massa , injured this year at Hungarian GP qualifying.
Revised:  Räikkönen is now free to choose another team . Alonso's teammate would be Felipe Massa , injured this year at Hungarian GP qualifying.
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Original:  Räikkönen is now free to choose another team , and Alonso's teammate would be Felipe Massa , injured this year at Hungarian GP qualifying.
Revised:  Räikkönen is now free to choose another team , and Alonso's teammate would be Felipe Massa who injured this year at Hungarian GP qualifying.
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Original:  Räikkönen is now free to choose another team , and Alonso's teammate would be Felipe Massa , injured this year at Hungarian GP qualifying.
Revised:  Räikkönen is now free to choose another team , and Alonso's teammate would be Felipe Massa , injured this year during the Hungarian GP qualifying.
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Original:  Massa was forced to retire from the end of this F1 season.
Revised:  Massa was forced to retire at the end of this F1 season.
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Original: Suzuka Circuit Red Bull driver Sebastian Vettel won from pole the FIA Formula One 2009 Fuji Television Japanese Grand Prix at Suzuka Circuit, Suzuka, Mie, Japan.
Revised: Suzuka Circuit Red Bull driver Sebastian Vettel won from pole position the Formula One 2009 Fuji Television Japanese Grand Prix at Suzuka Circuit, Suzuka, Mie, Japan.
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Original: Suzuka Circuit Red Bull driver Sebastian Vettel won from pole the FIA Formula One 2009 Fuji Television Japanese Grand Prix at Suzuka Circuit, Suzuka, Mie, Japan.
Revised: Suzuka Circuit Red Bull driver Sebastian Vettel won from pole the FIA Formula One 2009 Japanese Grand Prix at Suzuka Circuit, Suzuka, Mie, Japan.
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Original: Suzuka Circuit Red Bull driver Sebastian Vettel won from pole the FIA Formula One 2009 Fuji Television Japanese Grand Prix at Suzuka Circuit, Suzuka, Mie, Japan.
Revised: Suzuka Circuit Red Bull driver Sebastian Vettel won from pole the FIA Formula One 2009 Fuji Television Japanese Grand Prix at Suzuka Circuit, Japan.
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Original:  Jarno Trulli took second place for the Japanese Toyota team as Timo Glock was injured in a qualifying accident on Saturday and withdrew from the race on Sunday morning.
Revised:  Jarno Trulli took second place for the Japanese Toyota team , whilst his teammate Timo Glock was injured in a qualifying accident on Saturday and withdrew from the race on Sunday morning.
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Original:  Lewis Hamilton, winner of the previous Grand Prix at Singapore, closed the podium for McLaren starting from third place on the grid.
Revised:  Lewis Hamilton, winner of the previous Grand Prix at Singapore, closed the podium for McLaren having started from third place on the grid.
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Original:  Ferrari driver Kimi Räikkönen managed to pass Nick Heidfeld from BMW Sauber to finish fourth, together with Nico Rosberg of (Williams) .
Revised:  Ferrari driver Kimi Räikkönen managed to pass Nick Heidfeld from BMW Sauber to finish fourth, followed by Nico Rosberg of (Williams) .
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Original:  Ferrari driver Kimi Räikkönen managed to pass Nick Heidfeld from BMW Sauber to finish fourth, together with Nico Rosberg of (Williams) .
Revised:  Ferrari driver Kimi Räikkönen managed to pass Nick Heidfeld from BMW Sauber to finish fourth, together with Nico Rosberg of Williams .
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Original:  Both Brawns of the championship leaders, Rubens Barrichello and Jenson Button, closed the top eight.
Revised:  The two Brawns of the championship leaders, Rubens Barrichello and Jenson Button, closed the top eight.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel scored nine points more than Button and maintained  chances to win the championship.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel scored nine points more than Button and maintained his chances to win the championship.
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Original:  Brawn also lead  Constructor's standings with 156 points.
Revised:  Brawn also lead the Constructor's standings with 156 points.
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Original:  Red Bull is 35.5 points behind, still giving the team a chance to win the championship.
Revised:  Red Bull are 35.5 points behind, still giving the team a chance to win the championship.
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Original:  In other racing news this week, Fernando Alonso will move from team Renault to Ferrari next season.
Revised:  In other racing news this week, Fernando Alonso will move from Renault to Ferrari next season.
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Original:  Alonso was very enthusiastic about his decision by confessing in an interview that "it would be even more special to win a championship with Ferrari...
Revised:  Alonso was very enthusiastic about his decision , confessing in an interview that "it would be even more special to win a championship with Ferrari...
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Original:  Alonso's teammate would be Felipe Massa who  injured this year during the Hungarian GP qualifying.
Revised:  Alonso's teammate would be Felipe Massa who was injured this year during the Hungarian GP qualifying.
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Original: The BBC quotes researchers working on the site, which was excavated over the Summer by Sheffield University, as calling the discovery "very important".
Revised: The BBC quotes researchers working on the site, which was excavated over the summer by Sheffield University, as calling the discovery "very important".
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Original:  Stonehenge was linked to the River Avon by a pathway, and Bluehenge lies at the end of this  .
Revised:  Stonehenge was linked to the River Avon by a pathway, and Bluehenge lies at the end of this pathway .
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Original:  Stonehenge was linked to the River Avon by a pathway, and Bluehenge lies at the end of this pathway .
Revised:  Stonehenge was linked to the River Avon by a pathway, and Bluehenge lies at the end of it .
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Original: A Greek man was arrested at Jinnah International Airport in Karachi on accusations that he tried to smuggle a handgun hidden in his laptop onto an aircraft . Annkhus Sarzio was traveling with his mother on Emirates A330-200| flight EK 605, returning to his homeland in Athens, Greece via Dubai.
Revised: A Greek man was arrested at Jinnah International Airport in Karachi on accusations that he tried to smuggle a handgun hidden in his laptop onto an Airbus A330-200 . Annkhus Sarzio was traveling with his mother on Emirates A330-200| flight EK 605, returning to his homeland in Athens, Greece via Dubai.
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Original: A Greek man was arrested at Jinnah International Airport in Karachi on accusations that he tried to smuggle a handgun hidden in his laptop onto an aircraft . Annkhus Sarzio was traveling with his mother on Emirates A330-200| flight EK 605, returning to his homeland in Athens, Greece via Dubai.
Revised: A Greek man was arrested at Jinnah International Airport in Karachi on accusations that he tried to smuggle a handgun hidden in his laptop onto an aircraft . Annkhus Sarzio was due to travel with his mother on Emirates A330-200| flight EK 605, returning to his homeland in Athens, Greece via Dubai.
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Original: A Greek man was arrested at Jinnah International Airport in Karachi on accusations that he tried to smuggle a handgun hidden in his laptop onto an aircraft . Annkhus Sarzio was traveling with his mother on Emirates A330-200| flight EK 605, returning to his homeland in Athens, Greece via Dubai.
Revised: A Greek man was arrested at Jinnah International Airport in Karachi on accusations that he tried to smuggle a handgun hidden in his laptop onto an aircraft . Annkhus Sarzio was traveling with his mother on Emirates flight EK 605, returning to his homeland in Athens, Greece via Dubai.
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Original:  however, the suspect's mother has not been detained.
Revised:  the suspect's mother has not been detained.
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Original:  When they tried to pass through airport security, officers found a 9mm handgun concealed in  Sarzio's laptop 's battery compartment as their luggage passed through security scanners .
Revised:  When they tried to pass through airport security, scanning equipment detected a 9mm handgun concealed in Sarzio's laptop 's battery compartment as their luggage passed through security scanners .
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Original:  When they tried to pass through airport security, officers found a 9mm handgun concealed in  Sarzio's laptop 's battery compartment as their luggage passed through security scanners .
Revised:  When they tried to pass through airport security, officers found a 9mm handgun concealed in Sarzio's laptop .
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Original:  According to The News International, the man could have links with international terrorist groups and airport officials say this could be a part of a hijacking attempt
Revised:  According to The News International, the man could have links with international terrorist groups and airport officials say this could have been an attempt to hijack the airplane
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Original:  He says he is a businessman involved in carpets and that he had been staying in the city for the last month.
Revised:  He says he is a businessman involved in carpets and that he had been staying in the city for at least a month.
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Original: Sarzio claims in prelimanary investigations that he bought the handgun in Karachi.
Revised: Sarzio claims in preliminary investigations that he bought the handgun in Karachi.
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Original: Police in France (file photo) Debate is underway in France over the possibility of forcing male sex offenders to be chemically castrated.
Revised:  Debate is underway in France over the possibility of forcing male sex offenders to be chemically castrated.
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Original:  It works by using hormones and significanly reduces a target's libido.
Revised:  It works by using hormones and significantly reduces a target's libido.
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Original:  The ruling UMP's spokesman had already asked for the measures, and they were also sought by Justice Minister Michele Alliot-Marie, although she wanted castration to remain voluntary despite tougher laws sorounding it.
Revised:  The ruling UMP's spokesman had already asked for the measures, and they were also sought by Justice Minister Michele Alliot-Marie, although she wanted castration to remain voluntary despite tougher laws surrounding it.
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Original:  However, socialist opposition spokesman Benoît Hamon described forced castration as a "deplorable" and "indecent" scheme that might breach internaional legislation
Revised:  However, socialist opposition spokesman Benoît Hamon described forced castration as a "deplorable" and "indecent" scheme that might breach international legislation
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Original: Police in France (file photo) Debate is underway in France over the possibility of forcing male sex offenders to be chemically castrated.
Revised: Police in France Debate is underway in France over the possibility of forcing male sex offenders to be chemically castrated.
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Original: In resopnse , the US dispatched jets to launch air strikes on the area.
Revised: In response , the US dispatched jets to launch air strikes on the area.
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Original:  A statement by NATO announced that "coalition forces effectively repelled the attack and inflicted heavy enemy casualties while eight Isaf and two ANSF [Afghan National Security Forces] members were killed."
Revised:  A statement by NATO announced that "coalition forces effectively repelled the attack and inflicted heavy enemy casualties while eight ISAF and two ANSF [Afghan National Security Forces] members were killed."
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Original: Barret was returning from a trip to Buffalo, New York on Friday when he was arrested at Chicago's O'Hare International Airport.
Revised: Barrett was returning from a trip to Buffalo, New York on Friday when he was arrested at Chicago's O'Hare International Airport.
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Original:  He has been held over the weekend and made an initial court appearance in Chicago on Saturday      ] 
Revised:  He has been held over the weekend and made an initial court appearance in Chicago on Saturday . ] 
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Original:  He has been held over the weekend and made an initial court appearance in Chicago on Saturday      ] 
Revised:  He has been held over the weekend and made an initial court appearance in Chicago on Saturday do] 
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Original: Erin Andrews was videotaped nude in two separate hotels The FBI have arrested a man and charged him with interstate stalking over allegations he was responisble for nude videos of United States sports news presenter Erin Andrews.
Revised:  The FBI have arrested a man and charged him with interstate stalking over allegations he was responisble for nude videos of United States sports news presenter Erin Andrews.
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Original: [[File:ErinAndrews.jpg| 100px| Erin Andrews in 2007 ]] The FBI believes seven videos of Andrews were made in Nashville, Tennessee in September last year while another one was made in w:Milwaukee, Wisconsin.
Revised: [[File:ErinAndrews.jpg| Erin Andrews in 2007 ]] The FBI believes seven videos of Andrews were made in Nashville, Tennessee in September last year while another one was made in w:Milwaukee, Wisconsin.
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Original: [[File:ErinAndrews.jpg|Erin Andrews in 2007 ]] The FBI believes seven videos of Andrews were made in Nashville, Tennessee in September last year while another one was made in w: Milwaukee, Wisconsin.
Revised: [[File:ErinAndrews.jpg|Erin Andrews in 2007 ]] The FBI believes seven videos of Andrews were made in Nashville, Tennessee in September last year while another one was made in Milwaukee, Wisconsin.
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Original:  He faces the charge in Los Angeles where TMZ is based and tomorrow a judge will decide wether to send him there or release him on bail.
Revised:  He faces the charge in Los Angeles where TMZ is based and tomorrow a judge will decide whether to send him there or release him on bail.
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Original:  It is also claime he made a similar request when booking his room at the Marriot.
Revised:  It is also claimed he made a similar request when booking his room at the Marriot.
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Original:  Andrews has reviewed several of the videos in an effort to assist authotrities with their enquiries.
Revised:  Andrews has reviewed several of the videos in an effort to assist authorities with their enquiries.
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Original:  She has topped a Playboy poll for sexiest sportscastor for the last two years running.
Revised:  She has topped a Playboy poll for sexiest sportscaster for the last two years running.
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Original:  " " I don't think he's even had a traffic ticket...
Revised:  " I don't think he's even had a traffic ticket...
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Original:  The clash took place near the Mosque of Al Aksa , the site Jews call the Temple Mount.
Revised:  The clash took place near the Al-Aqsa Mosque , the site Jews call the Temple Mount.
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Original: Massachusetts-based First Amendment rights lawyer Marc Randazza is defending a controversial parody website which satirizes American political commentator Glenn Beck.
Revised:  First Amendment rights lawyer Marc Randazza is defending a controversial parody website which satirizes American political commentator Glenn Beck.
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Original: Randazza established an attorney-client relationship with Eiland-Hall after his client received threatening letters from attorney's representing Beck.
Revised: Randazza established an attorney-client relationship with Eiland-Hall after his client received threatening letters from attorneys representing Beck.
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Original: PASOK had over 43  \% of the ballot, compared to the conservative New Democracy's 35 \%, with almost all of the votes counted.
Revised: PASOK had 43 \% of the ballot, compared to the conservative New Democracy's 35 \%, with almost all of the votes counted.
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Original: n +%DIFDELCMD < {%%% date|October 5, 2009 + The Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) of Greece has won the country's general elections, results have shown .
Revised:  +%DIFDELCMD < {%%% date|October 5, 2009 + The Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) of Greece has won the country's general elections, results have shown .
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Original: n +%DIFDELCMD < {%%% date|October 5, 2009 + The Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) of Greece has won the country's general elections, results have shown .
Revised: n %DIFDELCMD < {%%% date|October 5, 2009 + The Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) of Greece has won the country's general elections, results have shown .
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Original: n +%DIFDELCMD < {%%% date|October 5, 2009 + The Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) of Greece has won the country's general elections, results have shown .
Revised: n +%DIFDELCMD < {%%% + The Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) of Greece has won the country's general elections, results have shown .
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Original: n +%DIFDELCMD < {%%% date|October 5, 2009 + The Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) of Greece has won the country's general elections, results have shown .
Revised: n +%DIFDELCMD < {%%% date|October 5, 2009 The Panhellenic Socialist Movement (PASOK) of Greece has won the country's general elections, results have shown .
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Original: Local rebel leader Government Tompolo arrived in Warri on Sunday, after promising to support Nigerian president Umaru Yar' Auda in return for a pardon.
Revised: Local rebel leader Government Tompolo arrived in Warri on Sunday, after promising to support Nigerian president Umaru Yar' Adua in return for a pardon.
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Original:  Nigerian president Yar'Adua at the 2008 World Economic ForumLocal  rebel leader Government Tompolo arrived in Warri on Sunday, after promising to support Nigerian president Umaru Yar'Adua in return for a pardon.
Revised:  Nigerian president Yar'Adua at the 2008 World Economic Forum rebel leader Government Tompolo arrived in Warri on Sunday, after promising to support Nigerian president Umaru Yar'Adua in return for a pardon.
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Original:  Nigerian president Yar'Adua at the 2008 World Economic ForumLocal  rebel leader Government Tompolo arrived in Warri on Sunday, after promising to support Nigerian president Umaru Yar'Adua in return for a pardon.
Revised:  Nigerian president Yar'Adua at the 2008 World Economic ForumLocal Local rebel leader Government Tompolo arrived in Warri on Sunday, after promising to support Nigerian president Umaru Yar'Adua in return for a pardon.
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Original:  In a report to the ,  Colonel Winthai Suwaree shared a similar sentiment: "[The junta] must look at [the protester ’ s] intention, what they want to communicate and surrounding circumstances . " 
Revised:  In a comment to the , Colonel Winthai Suwaree shared a similar sentiment: "[The junta] must look at [the protester ’ s] intention, what they want to communicate and surrounding circumstances . " 
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Original:  In a report to the ,  Colonel Winthai Suwaree shared a similar sentiment: "[The junta] must look at [the protester ’ s] intention, what they want to communicate and surrounding circumstances . " 
Revised:  In a report to the , Colonel Winthai Suwaree shared a similar sentiment: "[The junta] must look at [the protester ' s] intention, what they want to communicate and surrounding circumstances . " 
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