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Original:  The average wait time for elective care , 10.8 weeks , was down 29\% from May last year , according to chief executive of the NHS Confederation Matthew Taylor, who wrote in a publication on the organisation's web site the "treatment backlog of 5.3 million patients" nonetheless "show[s] that while waiting lists are still rising, more people are coming forward for care, which is encouraging, as this is exactly what the NHS is there for."
Revised:  The average wait time for elective care of 10.8 weeks , was down 29\% from May last year , according to chief executive of the NHS Confederation Matthew Taylor, who wrote in a publication on the organisation's web site the "treatment backlog of 5.3 million patients" nonetheless "show[s] that while waiting lists are still rising, more people are coming forward for care, which is encouraging, as this is exactly what the NHS is there for."
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Original:  The average wait time for elective care , 10.8 weeks , was down 29\% from May last year , according to chief executive of the NHS Confederation Matthew Taylor, who wrote in a publication on the organisation's web site the "treatment backlog of 5.3 million patients" nonetheless "show[s] that while waiting lists are still rising, more people are coming forward for care, which is encouraging, as this is exactly what the NHS is there for."
Revised:  The average wait time for elective care , 10.8 weeks was down 29\% from May last year , according to chief executive of the NHS Confederation Matthew Taylor, who wrote in a publication on the organisation's web site the "treatment backlog of 5.3 million patients" nonetheless "show[s] that while waiting lists are still rising, more people are coming forward for care, which is encouraging, as this is exactly what the NHS is there for."
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Original:  The average wait time for elective care , 10.8 weeks , was down 29\% from May last year , according to chief executive of the NHS Confederation Matthew Taylor, who wrote in a publication on the organisation's web site the "treatment backlog of 5.3 million patients" nonetheless "show[s] that while waiting lists are still rising, more people are coming forward for care, which is encouraging, as this is exactly what the NHS is there for."
Revised:  The average wait time for elective care , 10.8 weeks , was down 29\% from May last year , according to chief executive of the NHS Confederation Matthew Taylor, who wrote in a publication on the organisation's chief executive Matthew Taylor remarked the "treatment backlog of 5.3 million patients" nonetheless "show[s] that while waiting lists are still rising, more people are coming forward for care, which is encouraging, as this is exactly what the NHS is there for."
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Original:  In a blog post on the NHS Confederation's website, the organisation's chief executive Matthew Taylor remarked the "treatment backlog of 5.3 million patients" nonetheless "show[s] that while waiting lists are still rising, more people are coming forward for care, which is encouraging, as this is exactly what the NHS is there for."
Revised:  In a blog post on the the organisation's chief executive Matthew Taylor remarked the "treatment backlog of 5.3 million patients" nonetheless "show[s] that while waiting lists are still rising, more people are coming forward for care, which is encouraging, as this is exactly what the NHS is there for."
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Original:  An October analysis by estimates from the year before, 50 thousand fewer people were diagnosed with cancer, a backlog it warned could grow by four thousand missed diagnoses per month to over 100 thousand this October, and urgent referral activity in England for August  11\% behind 2019 levels.
Revised:  An October analysis by estimates from the year before, 50 thousand fewer people were diagnosed with cancer, a backlog it warned could grow by four thousand missed diagnoses per month to over 100 thousand this October, and urgent referral activity in England for August was 11\% behind 2019 levels.
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Original: Pegg resigned on April 22 to focus on fighting a cancer diagnosis, and died on June 10.
Revised: Pegg resigned on April 22 to deal with a cancer diagnosis, and died on June 10.
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Original:  Everyone has also been made to pivot to online meetings during Covid -19%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% too.
Revised:  Everyone has also been made to pivot to online meetings during Covid %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% too.
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Original:  It's important to note that the were touted as economically benefic i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% al as well, but the forecast benefits were not actually realised and there was a massive disruption for local residents.
Revised:  It's important to note that the were touted as economically benefic %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% al as well, but the forecast benefits were not actually realised and there was a massive disruption for local residents.
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Original:  It's important to note that the were touted as economically benefic i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% al as well, but the forecast benefits were not actually realised and there was a massive disruption for local residents.
Revised:  It's important to note that the were touted as economically benefic i%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 
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Original:  My community needs assurance that their private information isn ' t being used by third parties and that it ' s being stored securely and they don ' t have that confidence right now.
Revised:  My community needs assurance that their private information isn ’ t being used by third parties and that it ' s being stored securely and they don ' t have that confidence right now.
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Original:  My community needs assurance that their private information isn ' t being used by third parties and that it ' s being stored securely and they don ' t have that confidence right now.
Revised:  My community needs assurance that their private information isn ' t being used by third parties and that it ’ s being stored securely and they don ' t have that confidence right now.
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Original:  My community needs assurance that their private information isn ' t being used by third parties and that it ' s being stored securely and they don ' t have that confidence right now.
Revised:  My community needs assurance that their private information isn ' t being used by third parties and that it ' s being stored securely and they don ’ t have that confidence right now.
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Original: Pegg announced  resignation on April 22 to deal with a cancer diagnosis, and died on June 10.
Revised: Pegg announced his resignation on April 22 to deal with a cancer diagnosis, and died on June 10.
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Original: Goals for Victorycame from  Thompson and Daniel Allsop while Glory scorers where Damien Mori and Boby Despotovski.
Revised: Goals for Victorycame from Thompson and Daniel Allsop 
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Original:  Yesterday the Governor of US state of California Gavin Newsom signed a new USD 268 billion budget for state into law, with over USD 100 billion reserved for USD 600 direct stimulus payments to Californians to aid in California's recovery from the COVID-19 pandemic.
Revised:  Yesterday the Governor of US state of California Gavin Newsom signed a new 
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Original:  Eligible Californians would get a a one-time payment of USD 600, and those households with dependents would receive an additional USD 500.
Revised:  Eligible Californians would get a a one-time payment of US$600, and those households with dependents would receive an additional US$ 500.
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Original:  An additional payment of USD 500 is still available for those who claimed dependents on their returns.
Revised:  An additional payment of 
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Original:  An additional USD 1.5 billion was for grant money intended for small businesses, with USD 120 million earmarked for businesses willing to relocate to California.
Revised:  An additional USD 1.5 billion was for grant money intended for small businesses, with 
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Original:  Newsom proposed the payments back in May to aid the state's economic recovery, as part of his "California Comeback Plan"  
Revised:  Newsom proposed the payments back in May to aid the state's economic recovery, as part of his "California Comeback Plan" . 
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Original:  On Monday night, the governor of U.S. state of California Gavin Newsom signed a new US $262.6 billion budget for the state into law, with US$ 8.1 billion reserved for US $600 direct stimulus payments to Californians to aid in California's recovery from the COVID-19 pandemic.
Revised:  On Monday night, governor of the U.S. state of California Gavin Newsom signed a new US $262.6 billion budget for the state into law, with US$ 8.1 billion reserved for US $600 direct stimulus payments to Californians to aid in California's recovery from the COVID-19 pandemic.
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Original:  On Monday night, the governor of U.S. state of California Gavin Newsom signed a new US $262.6 billion budget for the state into law, with US$ 8.1 billion reserved for US $600 direct stimulus payments to Californians to aid in California's recovery from the COVID-19 pandemic.
Revised:  On Monday night, the governor of U.S. state of California Gavin Newsom signed a new US $262.6 billion budget bill for the state into law, with US$ 8.1 billion reserved for US $600 direct stimulus payments to Californians to aid in California's recovery from the COVID-19 pandemic.
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Original:  Eligible Californians would get a a one-time payment of US $600, and those households with dependents would receive an additional US$ 500.
Revised:  Eligible Californians would get a one-time payment of US $600, and those households with dependents would receive an additional US$ 500.
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Original:  Eligible Californians would get a a one-time payment of US $600, and those households with dependents would receive an additional US$ 500.
Revised:  Eligible Californians would get a a one-time payment of US $600, and households with dependents would receive an additional US$ 500.
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Original:  Newsom proposed the payments back in May to aid the state's economic recovery, as part of his "California Comeback Plan".
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Original: here A row of houses in Dublin with a 'for sale' sign at its entryway on May 20, 2008.
Revised:  A row of houses in Dublin with a 'for sale' sign at its entryway on May 20, 2008.
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Original:  housing's not like stocks and s, you know s and shares, they're pieces of paper.
Revised:  housing's not like s and s, you know s and shares, they're pieces of paper.
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Original:  housing's not like stocks and s, you know s and shares, they're pieces of paper.
Revised:  housing's not like stocks and s, you know stocks and shares, they're pieces of paper.
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Original:  So, it's kind of , and it's bad to rely on it because we're always looking for things that would keep prices high and not lower them. 
Revised:  So, it's kind of , and it's bad to rely on it because we're always looking for things that would keep prices high and not lower them. here
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Original:  In addition to being a chartered planning and development surveyor and assessor to the Society of Chartered Surveyors, according to his profile on , Dr Sirr is a and former external examiner for the  . Dr Sirr was a lecturer and former head of research for the Faculty of the Built Environment at the , which entered a merger with two partner institutes to become TUD January 1, 2019.
Revised:  In addition to being a chartered planning and development surveyor and assessor to the Society of Chartered Surveyors, Dr Sirr is a and former external examiner for the . Dr Sirr was a lecturer and former head of research for the Faculty of the Built Environment at the , which entered a merger with two partner institutes to become TUD January 1, 2019.
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Original:  In addition to being a chartered planning and development surveyor and assessor to the Society of Chartered Surveyors, according to his profile on , Dr Sirr is a and former external examiner for the  . Dr Sirr was a lecturer and former head of research for the Faculty of the Built Environment at the , which entered a merger with two partner institutes to become TUD January 1, 2019.
Revised:  In addition to being a chartered planning and development surveyor and assessor to the Society of Chartered Surveyors, according to his profile on , Dr Sirr is a and former external examiner for the , according to his profile on . Dr Sirr was a lecturer and former head of research for the Faculty of the Built Environment at the , which entered a merger with two partner institutes to become TUD January 1, 2019.
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Original:  He received his in  urban design and in town planning at the , United Kingdom, and second master's in literature at KU Leuven, Belgium  .
Revised:  He received his in urban design and in town planning at the . He has a second master's in literature at KU Leuven, Belgium .
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Original:  He received his in  urban design and in town planning at the , United Kingdom, and second master's in literature at KU Leuven, Belgium  .
Revised:  He received his in urban design and in town planning at the , United Kingdom, and second master's in literature from KU Leuven, Belgium .
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Original: Now, you're saying  the 4\% the 4\% the 4\%  , I know the [government] opposition, and , even before the [COVID-19] pandemic, they've been advocating for a temporary, I believe, ban on rent increases, or just a rent-freeze overall.
Revised: Now, you're saying , ' the 4\% the 4\% the 4\% , I know the [government] opposition, and , even before the [COVID-19] pandemic, they've been advocating for a temporary, I believe, ban on rent increases, or just a rent-freeze overall.
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Original: Now, you're saying  the 4\% the 4\% the 4\%  , I know the [government] opposition, and , even before the [COVID-19] pandemic, they've been advocating for a temporary, I believe, ban on rent increases, or just a rent-freeze overall.
Revised: Now, you're saying the 4\% the 4\% the 4\% ' , I know the [government] opposition, and , even before the [COVID-19] pandemic, they've been advocating for a temporary, I believe, ban on rent increases, or just a rent-freeze overall.
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Original:  Thousands of Germans were left homeless due to their homes not only floodingbut also collapsing or being deemed at high risk of collapsing because of the floods.
Revised:  Thousands of Germans were left homeless due to flooding, buildings collapsing or being deemed at high risk of collapsing because of the floods.
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Original:  As of Saturday , a dam near was at a high risk of collapsing.
Revised:  As of Saturday , a dam near was classified as a high-risk of collapsing.
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Original:  The residents of the entire Belgian city of were encouraged to evacuateThursday, totalling 200 thousand people .
Revised:  On Thursday, the residents of the entire Belgian city of were encouraged to evacuateThursday, totalling 200 thousand people .
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Original:  The residents of the entire Belgian city of were encouraged to evacuateThursday, totalling 200 thousand people .
Revised:  The residents of the entire Belgian city of were ordered to evacuate .
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Original:  Local government reported a dam broke along the in the German province of last night.
Revised:  The regional government reported a dam broke along the in the German province of last night.
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Original:  Local government reported a dam broke along the in the German province of last night.
Revised:  Local government reported a dam broke along the in the German province last night.
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Original:  District of Colombia police said the shooting happened outside the ballpark's third base gate on South Capitol Street, telling the The Washington Post that one woman was shot and two others took themselves to the hospital.
Revised: The District of Colombia police said the shooting happened outside the ballpark's third base gate on South Capitol Street, telling the The Washington Post that one woman was shot and two others took themselves to the hospital.
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Original:  District of Colombia police said the shooting happened outside the ballpark's third base gate on South Capitol Street, telling the The Washington Post that one woman was shot and two others took themselves to the hospital.
Revised:  District of Colombia 's (MPD) said the shooting happened outside the ballpark's third base gate on South Capitol Street, telling the The Washington Post that one woman was shot and two others took themselves to the hospital.
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Original:  Three people were shot outside Nationals Park in the U.S. capital city of Washington, D.C. during a baseball game Saturday night between the Washington Nationals and the San Diego Padres during the bottom of the game's sixth inning.
Revised:  Three people were shot outside Nationals Park in the U.S. capital city of Washington, D.C. during a baseball game Saturday night between the Washington Nationals and the San Diego Padres at the bottom of the game's sixth inning.
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Original:  The game was suspended until the next day , rescheduled to continue before a game that was already scheduled for Sunday .
Revised:  The game was suspended until the next day .
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Original:  On Twitter, the Post'''s Sam Fortier said, " Stadium  employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting." D.C. police believe that gunfire was shot from one vehicle to another.
Revised:  On Twitter, the Post'''s Sam Fortier wrote " Stadium employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting." D.C. police believe that gunfire was shot from one vehicle to another.
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Original:  On Twitter, the Post'''s Sam Fortier said, " Stadium  employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting." D.C. police believe that gunfire was shot from one vehicle to another.
Revised:  On Twitter, the Post'''s Sam Fortier said, " s employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting." D.C. police believe that gunfire was shot from one vehicle to another.
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Original:  On Twitter, the Post'''s Sam Fortier said, " Stadium  employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting." D.C. police believe that gunfire was shot from one vehicle to another.
Revised:  On Twitter, the Post'''s Sam Fortier said, " Stadium tadium employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting." D.C. police believe that gunfire was shot from one vehicle to another.
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Original:  On Twitter, the Post'''s Sam Fortier said, " Stadium  employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting." D.C. police believe that gunfire was shot from one vehicle to another.
Revised:  On Twitter, the Post'''s Sam Fortier said, " Stadium employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting." D.C. police believe gunfire was shot from one vehicle to another.
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Original:  The gunshots were audible within the stadium which sent fans and players into a panic , with players exiting the field right after and some fans fleeing the stadium through the park's gates.
Revised:  Gunshots were audible within the stadium which sent fans and players into a panic , with players exiting the field right after and some fans fleeing the stadium through the park's gates.
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Original:  The gunshots were audible within the stadium which sent fans and players into a panic , with players exiting the field right after and some fans fleeing the stadium through the park's gates.
Revised:  The gunshots were audible within the stadium which led many to disperse , with players exiting the field right after and some fans fleeing the stadium through the park's gates.
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Original:  Both Tatis and Machado along with Padres  and helped pull family members and spectators into the dugout's safety.
Revised:  Both Tatis and Machado along with Padres players and helped pull family members and spectators into the dugout's safety.
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Original:  Fans were first told to remain within the stadium, until later being encouraged to leave through the outfield.
Revised:  Fans were first told to remain within the stadium, but was later being encouraged to leave through the outfield.
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Original:  At the time of the game's suspension, the Padres were leading the game 8–4.
Revised:  At the game's suspension, the Padres were leading the game 8–4.
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Original:  At the time of the game's suspension, the Padres were leading the game 8–4.
Revised:  At the time of the game's suspension, the Padres were leading eight points to four.
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Original:  The suspended game resumed yesterday at 1:08 p.m. EST (1708 UTC), where the Padres beat the Nationals 10–4, getting two more runs after Saturday's postponement.
Revised:  The suspended game resumed yesterday at 1:08 p.m. EST (1708 UTC), where the Padres beat the Nationals 10–4, gaining two additional runs after Saturday's postponement.
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Original:  The Nationals rallied back and won the game that was already scheduled for Sunday against the Padres , 8–7, which ended a six-game streak of losses for the Washington team
Revised:  The Nationals rallied and won the game that was already scheduled for Sunday against the Padres , 8–7, which ended a six-game streak of losses for the Washington team
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Original:  The Nationals rallied back and won the game that was already scheduled for Sunday against the Padres , 8–7, which ended a six-game streak of losses for the Washington team
Revised:  The Nationals rallied back and won the game already scheduled for Sunday against the Padres , 8–7, which ended a six-game streak of losses for the Washington team
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Original:  The Nationals rallied back and won the game that was already scheduled for Sunday against the Padres , 8–7, which ended a six-game streak of losses for the Washington team
Revised:  The Nationals rallied back and won the game that was already scheduled for Sunday against the Padres 8–7, which ended a six-game streak of losses for the Washington team
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Original:  On Twitter, the Post'''s Sam Fortier wrote "[s]tadium employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting."
Revised:  On Twitter, The Washington Post'''s Sam Fortier wrote "[s]tadium employees are saying this appeared to be a drive-by shooting."
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Original:  Padres players and opened the gate to the field allowing parkgoers into the , the  Post'''s Andrew Golden said on Twitter.
Revised:  Padres players and opened the gate to the field allowing parkgoers into the , the The Washington Post'''s Andrew Golden said on Twitter.
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Original:  The park was emptied out by 10:05 p.m . (0205 ).
Revised:  The park was emptied out by 10:05 P.M . (0205 ).
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Original:  The suspended game resumed yesterday at 1:08 p.m . EST (1708 UTC), where the Padres beat the Nationals 10–4, gaining two additional runs after Saturday's postponement.
Revised:  The suspended game resumed yesterday at 1:08 P.M . EST (1708 UTC), where the Padres beat the Nationals 10–4, gaining two additional runs after Saturday's postponement.
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Original: Gunshots were audible within the stadium which led many to disperse, with players exiting the field right after and some fans fleeing the stadium through the park's gates.
Revised: Gunshots were audible within the stadium which led many to disperse, with players exiting the field right after and some spectators fleeing the stadium through the park's gates.
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