wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Close up of the Northern Snakehead A predatory non-native fish species known as the Northern Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in waters east of the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in quantities numbering into the 80’s on a small feeder creek of the Potomac River earlier this week.
Revised:  A predatory non-native fish species known as the Northern Snakehead, discovered 3 years ago in waters east of the Chesapeake Bay, were caught in quantities numbering into the 80’s on a small feeder creek of the Potomac River earlier this week.
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Original:  Acting out the events, he added "Bang, bang in his chest.   
Revised:  Acting out the events, he added "Bang, bang in his chest. " 
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Original:  Fitzsimons pulled his own gun and shot the guard in the thigh, for which he faces an attempted murder charge    [ [ [ 
Revised:  Fitzsimons pulled his own gun and shot the guard in the thigh, for which he faces an attempted murder charge . [ [ [ 
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Original:  Fitzsimons pulled his own gun and shot the guard in the thigh, for which he faces an attempted murder charge    [ [ [ 
Revised:  Fitzsimons pulled his own gun and shot the guard in the thigh, for which he faces an attempted murder charge [ [t [ 
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Original:  Fitzsimons retorted that this breached his right to a fair trial: "This is not fair.
Revised:  Fitzsimons retorted that he belives this breaches his right to a fair trial: "This is not fair.
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Original:  The first Westerner tried in Iraq since the invasion in 2003, he testified that the trio were drinking whiskey and began fighting after he punched McGuigan's face.
Revised:  The first Westerner tried in Iraq since the invasion in 2003, he testified that the trio were drinking whisky and began fighting after he punched McGuigan's face.
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Original: Danny Fitzsimons, 30, gave evidence today to the court in Karkh, Baghdad trying him for murdering a fellow Brit and an Australian in August 2009.
Revised: Danny Fitzsimons, 30, gave evidence today to a court in Karkh, Baghdad trying him for murdering a fellow Brit and an Australian in August 2009.
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Original: Danny Fitzsimons, 30, gave evidence today to the court in Karkh, Baghdad trying him for murdering a fellow Brit and an Australian in August 2009.
Revised: Danny Fitzsimons, 30, gave evidence today to the court in Karkh, Baghdad trying him for the murder of two British and Australian colleagues in August 2009.
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Original:  The security contractor said his ArmorGroup collegues had tried to kill him in the city's Green Zone, challenged the fairness of his trial and offered a plea bargain.
Revised:  The British security contractor claimed he acted in self-defence against his fellow ArmorGroup employees in the city's Green Zone, challenged the fairness of his trial and offered a plea bargain.
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Original:  He then fled for the British Embassy, but was stopped by an Iraqi guard who ordered the bloodsoaked man to stop at gunpoint.
Revised:  He then fled for the British Embassy, but was stopped by an Iraqi guard who ordered the blood-soaked man to stop at gunpoint.
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Original:  Fitzsimons was previously diagnosed by a medical comittee with post traumatic stress disorder and made multiple requests to tell the judges about this.
Revised:  Fitzsimons was previously diagnosed by a medical committee with post traumatic stress disorder and made multiple requests to tell the judges about this.
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Original:  Fitzsimons retorted that he belives this breaches his right to a fair trial: "This is not fair.
Revised:  Fitzsimons retorted that he believes this breaches his right to a fair trial: "This is not fair.
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Original:  The right to a fair trial is given by two pieces of legislation.
Revised:  The right to a fair trial is enshrined in
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Original:  Article 10 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights  states "[e]veryone is entitled... to a fair and public hearing by an independent and impartial tribunal, in the determination of... any criminal charge against him."
Revised:  Article 10 of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights , which states "[e]veryone is entitled... to a fair and public hearing by an independent and impartial tribunal, in the determination of... any criminal charge against him."
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Original: Danny Fitzsimons, 30, gave evidence today to a court in Karkh, Baghdad trying him for the murder of two British and Australian colleagues in August 2009.
Revised: Danny Fitzsimons, 30, gave evidence today to the court in Karkh, Baghdad trying him for the murder of two British and Australian colleagues in August 2009.
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Original: Danny Fitzsimons, 30, gave evidence today to a court in Karkh, Baghdad trying him for the murder of two British and Australian colleagues in August 2009.
Revised: Danny Fitzsimons, 30, gave evidence today to a court in Karkh, Baghdad trying him for murdering a fellow Brit and an Australian in August 2009.
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Original:  The British security contractor claimed he acted in self-defence against his fellow ArmorGroup employees in the city's Green Zone, challenged the fairness of his trial and offered a plea bargain.
Revised:  The security contractor said his ArmorGroup collegues had tried to kill him in the city's Green Zone, challenged the fairness of his trial and offered a plea bargain.
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Original: category:Australiacategory:Oceaniacategory:Politics and conflicts An Australian Senate inquiry into new federal anti-terrorism laws is to take place in effectively one day, as was revealed in the Senate October 13.
Revised: category:Australiacategory:Oceaniacategory:Politics and conflicts An Australian Senate inquiry into new federal anti-terrorism laws is to take place in effectively one day, it was revealed in the Senate October 13.
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Original:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year  by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for,  the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
Revised:  Amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for, the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
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Original:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year  by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for,  the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
Revised:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed : the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for, the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
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Original:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year  by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for,  the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
Revised:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 was proposed by Senator Andrew Bartlett, and November 28 this year by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for, the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
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Original:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year  by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for,  the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
Revised:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year was proposed by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for, the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
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Original:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year  by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for,  the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
Revised:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year by Natasha Stott-Despoja . A division on those amendments was called for, the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
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Original:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year  by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for,  the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
Revised:  However, as amendments to make the date for report later were proposed ( the first date of sitting in 2006 by Senators Andrew Bartlett and November 28 this year by Natasha Stott-Despoja ) and a division on those amendments was called for, but the vote must take place on the next day of sitting -- November 7, due to an earlier order regarding divisions on Thursday at 4.30pm.
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Original:  Senator John Faulkner had called the situation "sheer bastardry of the government", and said "It is one of the most contemptible and despicable things I have ever seen in the time that I have been a senator in this chamber.
Revised:  Senator John Faulkner called the situation "sheer bastardry of the government", and said "It is one of the most contemptible and despicable things I have ever seen in the time that I have been a senator in this chamber.
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Original:  Senator Bob Brown has stated that in order to elucidate furhter Government actions, "between now and Christmas, when Senator Hill asks for leave, he will not get it.
Revised:  Senator Bob Brown has stated that in order to elucidate further Government actions, "between now and Christmas, when Senator Hill asks for leave, he will not get it.
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Original:  He will not get it . " and later called the government "a disgrace [...] to Australia . " and "a disgrace [...] to this nation."
Revised:  He will not get it , " and later called the government "a disgrace [...] to Australia . " and "a disgrace [...] to this nation."
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Original:  He will not get it . " and later called the government "a disgrace [...] to Australia . " and "a disgrace [...] to this nation."
Revised:  He will not get it . " and later called the government "a disgrace [...] to Australia , " and "a disgrace [...] to this nation."
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Original:  Senator Julian McGauran , who earlier that week had drawn the anger of Senator Stott-Despoja , who lost a friend in the September 11 attacks asking her " Have you once in this chamber acknowledged the war on terror?", today had said that "You would be against [the laws] anyway."
Revised:  Senator Julian McGauran said to Senator Stott-Despoja , who lost a friend in the September 11 attacks asking her " Have you once in this chamber acknowledged the war on terror?", today had said that "You would be against [the laws] anyway."
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Original:  Senator Julian McGauran , who earlier that week had drawn the anger of Senator Stott-Despoja , who lost a friend in the September 11 attacks asking her " Have you once in this chamber acknowledged the war on terror?", today had said that "You would be against [the laws] anyway."
Revised:  Senator Julian McGauran , who earlier that week had drawn the anger of Senator Stott-Despoja " Have you once in this chamber acknowledged the war on terror?", today had said that "You would be against [the laws] anyway."
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Original:  Senator Julian McGauran , who earlier that week had drawn the anger of Senator Stott-Despoja , who lost a friend in the September 11 attacks asking her " Have you once in this chamber acknowledged the war on terror?", today had said that "You would be against [the laws] anyway."
Revised:  Senator Julian McGauran , who earlier that week had drawn the anger of Senator Stott-Despoja , who lost a friend in the September 11 attacks asking her " you would be against [the laws] anyway."
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Original:  Of course, that would make a mockery of the system . " and that the Opposition failing to drop the amendments "clearly indicates that the Labor Party ... are going to try to play the technical game and say, 'The government will only give us one day to deal with the issue.'
Revised:  Of course, that would make a mockery of the system , " and that the Opposition failing to drop the amendments "clearly indicates that the Labor Party ... are going to try to play the technical game and say, 'The government will only give us one day to deal with the issue.'
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Original: Senator Julian McGauran said to Senator Stott-Despoja " you would be against the laws%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% anyway ." Senator Stott-Despoja replied "Don't bait me, Senator McGauran, today because I am not in the mood for it."
Revised: Senator Julian McGauran said to Senator Stott-Despoja " the laws%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% anyway ." Senator Stott-Despoja replied "Don't bait me, Senator McGauran, today because I am not in the mood for it."
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Original: Senator Julian McGauran said to Senator Stott-Despoja " you would be against the laws%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% anyway ." Senator Stott-Despoja replied "Don't bait me, Senator McGauran, today because I am not in the mood for it."
Revised: Senator Julian McGauran said to Senator Stott-Despoja " you would be against %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% anyway ." Senator Stott-Despoja replied "Don't bait me, Senator McGauran, today because I am not in the mood for it."
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Original:  Of course, that would make a mockery of the system," and that the Opposition failing to drop the amendments "clearly indicates that the Labor Party ... are going to try to play the technical game and say, 'The government will only give us one day to deal with the issue. '
Revised:  Of course, that would make a mockery of the system," and that the Opposition failing to drop the amendments "clearly indicates that the Labor Party ... are going to try to play the technical game and say, 'The government will only give us one day to deal with the issue. 
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Original:  The drug is also seen to be "safer" than most drugs that are illegal in the West, because it is almost impossible to ingest a lethal dose through smoking it
Revised:  The drug is also seen to be "safer" than most drugs that are illegal in the West, because it is almost impossible to ingest a lethal dose 
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Original:  Marijuana contains a complex mixture of chemicals including cannabinoids and may have somewhat different behavioral effects than the purified cannabinoids tested so far. 180px Previous studies examining the affects of cannabis have highlighted negative aspects of the drug's use, such as short term memory difficulties, increased heart rate, nausea, and (in a very small percentage of people) hallucinations.
Revised:  Marijuana contains a complex mixture of chemicals including cannabinoids and may have somewhat different behavioral effects than the purified cannabinoids tested so far. Previous studies examining the affects of cannabis have highlighted negative aspects of the drug's use, such as short term memory difficulties, increased heart rate, nausea, and (in a very small percentage of people) hallucinations.
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Original: 260px|Marijuana plants In the November issue of the Journal of Clinical Investigation, researchers announce that they have found that cannabinoids promoted a generation of new neurons in rats' hippocampi .
Revised: 260px|Marijuana plants In the November issue of the Journal of Clinical Investigation, researchers announce that they have found that cannabinoids promoted a generation of new neurons in rats' hippocampus .
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Original: 260px|Marijuana plants In the November issue of the Journal of Clinical Investigation, researchers announce that they have found that cannabinoids promoted a generation of new neurons in rats' hippocampus .
Revised: 260px|Marijuana plants In the November issue of the Journal of Clinical Investigation, researchers announce that they have found that cannabinoids promoted a generation of new neurons in rats' hippocampi .
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Original: "Our results were obtained from rats, and there's a big difference between rats and humans," added Zhang, "So, I don't really don't know yet if our findings apply to humans.
Revised: "Our results were obtained from rats, and there's a big difference between rats and humans," added Zhang, "So, I really don't know yet if our findings apply to humans.
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Original:  However, proponents argue that the correlation between cannabis consumption and lung cancer is misleading suggesting that cannabis use may correlate with tobacco use or that the data is not being properly analyzed  
Revised:  However, proponents argue that the correlation between cannabis consumption and lung cancer is misleading suggesting that cannabis use may correlate with tobacco use or that the data is not being properly analyzed . 
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Original:  However, proponents argue that the correlation between cannabis consumption and lung cancer is misleading suggesting that cannabis use may correlate with tobacco use or that the data is not being properly analyzed  
Revised:  However, proponents argue that the correlation between cannabis consumption and lung cancer is misleading suggesting that cannabis use may correlate with tobacco use or that the data is not being properly analyzed Related Stories Meth use now USA's top drug problem, survey find
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Original: Previous studies examining the affects of cannabis have highlighted negative aspects of the drug's use, such as short term memory difficulties, increased heart rate, nausea, and (in a very small percentage of people) hallucinations.
Revised: Previous studies examining the effects of cannabis have highlighted negative aspects of the drug's use, such as short term memory difficulties, increased heart rate, nausea, and (in a very small percentage of people) hallucinations.
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Original: An explosion occurred in a bus in the northbound lane of EDSA in Makati City, Philippines.
Revised: An explosion occurred in a bus in EDSA in Makati City, Philippines.
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Original:  The blast occurred in an air-conditioned bus (plate number TXJ-710) shortly before 2 p.m. 4 are dead with 14 more wounded.
Revised:  The blast occurred in shortly before 2 p.m. 4 are dead with 14 more wounded.
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Original:  The blast occurred in an air-conditioned bus (plate number TXJ-710) shortly before 2 p.m. 4 are dead with 14 more wounded.
Revised:  The blast occurred in an air-conditioned bus (plate number TXJ-710) shortly before 2 p.m. Four are dead with 14 more wounded.
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Original:  The blast occurred in an air-conditioned bus (plate number TXJ-710) shortly before 2 p.m. 4 are dead with 14 more wounded.
Revised:  The blast occurred in an air-conditioned bus (plate number TXJ-710) shortly before 2 p.m. 4 are dead with fourteen more wounded.
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Original:  After the explosion, NCRPO ( National Capital Region Police Office ) chief DirectorNicanor Bartolome said that he formed a special investigation team and a crisis management committee.
Revised:  After the explosion, the National Capital Region Police Office ) chief DirectorNicanor Bartolome said that he formed a special investigation team and a crisis management committee.
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Original:  After the explosion, NCRPO ( National Capital Region Police Office ) chief DirectorNicanor Bartolome said that he formed a special investigation team and a crisis management committee.
Revised:  After the explosion, NCRPO ( National Capital Region Police Office 's Chief Director, Nicanor Bartolome, said that he formed a special investigation team and a crisis management committee.
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Original:  President Benigno Aquino III condoled with the grieving families of the dead.
Revised:  President Benigno Aquino III condoled the grieving families of the dead.
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Original:  The Metro Manila police is now on full alert following the blast.
Revised:  The Metro Manila police are now on full alert following the blast.
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Original:  News  reached the Malacañang Palace about the blast.
Revised:  News After news reached the Malacañang Palace about the blast.
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Original:  The spokesman , Eduardo Lacierda said that the cause of the blast is "some sort of explosive device placed in the vicinity of the middle of the bus."
Revised:  The spokesman , Eduardo Lacierda said that the cause of the blast was "some sort of explosive device placed in the vicinity of the middle of the bus."
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Original:  The bus driver noticed that the smellwas not normal, but was gunpowder.
Revised:  The bus driver noticed an abnormal smell, namely gunpowder.
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Original:  He stated that mechanical failure as a cause to the blast is impossible .
Revised:  He stated that mechanical failure could not possibly be the cause .
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Original:  The police have yet to know what type of explosive was used in the explosion.
Revised:  The police are yet to establish what type of explosive was used in the explosion.
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Original: An explosion occurred in a bus in the Epifanio de los Santos Avenue , in Makati City, Philippines on Tuesday.
Revised: An explosion occurred in a bus in the , in Makati City, Philippines on Tuesday.
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Original:  President Benigno Aquino III condoled the grieving families of the dead.
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Original:  After news reached the Malacañang Palace spokesman Eduardo Lacierda said that the cause of the blast was "some sort of explosive device placed in the vicinity of the middle of the bus."
Revised:  After news reached the spokesman Eduardo Lacierda said that the cause of the blast was "some sort of explosive device placed in the vicinity of the middle of the bus."
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Original:  At least one of seven arrests by security officials on Friday was made in The Hague, the seat of the Dutch government , ANP said. -- 
Revised:  They report that at least one of seven arrests by security officials on Friday was made in The Hague, the seat of the Dutch government , ANP said. -- 
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