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Original: In 1795 his regiment was ordered to reduce the Fort Emmanuel| Dutch garrison (Fort Stormsburg) of Cochin on the coast of Malabar.
Revised: In 1795 his regiment was ordered to reduce the Dutch garrison (Fort Stormsburg) of Cochin on the coast of Malabar.
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Original:  The home of Sir Archibald and Lady Helen (MacDonald) Campbell]] upright=1.3|The grave of Gen Sir Archibald Campbell, St Johns, Edinburgh Archibald Campbell married, Miss Helen McDonald , a sister of John MacDonald of Garth, on 6 July 1801 at Marylebone, London.
Revised:  The home of Sir Archibald and Lady Helen (MacDonald) Campbell]] upright=1.3|The grave of Gen Sir Archibald Campbell, St Johns, Edinburgh Archibald Campbell married, Miss Helen MacDonald , a sister of John MacDonald of Garth, on 6 July 1801 at Marylebone, London.
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Original:  The home of Sir Archibald and Lady Helen (MacDonald) Campbell]] upright=1.3|The grave of Gen Sir Archibald Campbell, St Johns, Edinburgh Archibald Campbell married , Miss Helen MacDonald, a sister of John MacDonald of Garth, on 6 July 1801 at Marylebone, London.
Revised:  The home of Sir Archibald and Lady Helen (MacDonald) Campbell]] upright=1.3|The grave of Gen Sir Archibald Campbell, St Johns, Edinburgh Archibald Campbell married Helen MacDonald, a sister of John MacDonald of Garth, on 6 July 1801 at Marylebone, London.
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Original: Eknath Dhondu 'Ekky' Solkar (18 March 1948 in Bombay – 26 June 2005 in Mumbai ) was an Indian all-round cricketer who played 27 Tests and seven One Day Internationals for his country.
Revised: Eknath Dhondu 'Ekky' Solkar (18 March 1948 – 26 June 2005 in Mumbai ) was an Indian all-round cricketer who played 27 Tests and seven One Day Internationals for his country.
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Original: Eknath Dhondu 'Ekky' Solkar (18 March 1948 in Bombay – 26 June 2005 in Mumbai ) was an Indian all-round cricketer who played 27 Tests and seven One Day Internationals for his country.
Revised: Eknath Dhondu 'Ekky' Solkar (18 March 1948 in Bombay – 26 June 2005 ) was an Indian all-round cricketer who played 27 Tests and seven One Day Internationals for his country.
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Original:  He was born in Bombay, and died of heart attack in the same city at the age of 57. Solkar was a capable bat with a Test century to his name,and he could bowl fast as well as slow,which earned him the distinction "Poor man's Sobers".
Revised:  He was born in Bombay, and Solkar was a capable bat with a Test century to his name,and he could bowl fast as well as slow,which earned him the distinction "Poor man's Sobers".
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Original: Solkar was a capable bat with a Test century to his name, and he could bowl fast as well as slow , which earned him the distinction "Poor man's Sobers" . Solkar was renowned for his excellent close fielding, of which he once remarked, "I only watch the ball."
Revised: Solkar was a capable bat with a Test century to his name, and he could bowl fast as well as slow . Solkar was renowned for his excellent close fielding, of which he once remarked, "I only watch the ball."
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Original:  Eknath's teammate at Sussex Tony Greig once said, "He was the best forward short leg I've ever URL
Revised:  Eknath's teammate at Sussex Tony Greig once said, "He was the best forward short leg I've ever seen."
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Original: Benjamin Jackson Burnley IV (born March 10, 1978) is an American musician, singer, songwriter, and record producer, best known as the founder and frontman of the American rock band Breaking Benjamin.
Revised: Benjamin Jackson Burnley IV (born March 10, 1978) is an American musician, singer, songwriter, and record producer, best known as the founder , frontman and namesake of the American rock band Breaking Benjamin.
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Original: Benjamin Jackson Burnley IV (born March 10, 1978) is an American musician, singer, songwriter, and record producer, best known as the founder , frontman and namesake of the American rock band Breaking Benjamin.
Revised: Benjamin Jackson Burnley IV (born March 10, 1978) is an American musician, singer, songwriter, and record producer, best known as the founder and frontman of the American rock band Breaking Benjamin.
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Original:   In 1811, the Spanish Viceroy in Mexico sent an interrogatorio (questionnaire) to all missions in Alta California regarding the customs, disposition, and condition of the Mission Indians.
Revised: The hierarchy of power in missions was a major cause of culture clash between Franciscan missionaries and Native Americans. Missionaries delineated authority to Native American officials who often held power within their own tribes, but this authority clashed with their own cultural values. While social organization in precontact California is scarcely recorded, but a ruling elite presided over commoners and an underclass, determined by lineage and cultural inheritance. Conversely, mission power structure was determined by elections, eliminating traditional Native American social hierarchy and replacing it with a system heavily monitored and often controlled by Franciscans. In 1811, the Spanish Viceroy in Mexico sent an interrogatorio (questionnaire) to all missions in Alta California regarding the customs, disposition, and condition of the Mission Indians.
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Original:   In 1811, the Spanish Viceroy in Mexico sent an interrogatorio (questionnaire) to all missions in Alta California regarding the customs, disposition, and condition of the Mission Indians.
Revised:  Native American officials were often tasked with keeping the peace between missionaries and Native American inhabitants, leading to increased friction between officials and their unelected counterparts. Regarding the duty of officials, Junípero Serra wrote in a letter to his trusted subordinate Fermín Lasuén: "Ask him to carry out this function so that, without failing in the slightest degree in his duty toward his superior officer, the Indians may not be given a less exalted opinion of the fathers than they have had until now." In 1811, the Spanish Viceroy in Mexico sent an interrogatorio (questionnaire) to all missions in Alta California regarding the customs, disposition, and condition of the Mission Indians.
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Original:  It has been generally held that most Indians enjoyed their new lives, and that many were able to sustain themselves after the fall of the mission system by utilizing the skills they had acquired at the missions.
Revised:  For many years, it was commonly taught that the Indians enjoyed their new lives, and that many were able to sustain themselves after the fall of the mission system by utilizing the skills they had acquired at the missions.
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Original:  Missionaries delineated authority to Native American officials who often held power within their own tribes, but this authority clashed with their own cultural values.
Revised:  Missionaries devolved authority to Native American officials who often held power within their own tribes, but this authority clashed with their own cultural values.
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Original:  While social organization in precontact California is scarcely recorded, but a ruling elite presided over commoners and an underclass, determined by lineage and cultural inheritance.
Revised:  Social organization in precontact California is scarcely recorded, but a ruling elite presided over commoners and an underclass, determined by lineage and cultural inheritance.
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Original:  The priests offered beads, clothing, blankets, even food to the " heathens " to attract them to the prospects of mission life and convince them to move into the mission compound or a nearby village.
Revised:  The priests offered beads, clothing, blankets, even food to the " gentiles " to attract them to the prospects of mission life and convince them to move into the mission compound or a nearby village.
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Original:  The Missions were religious outposts established by Spanish Catholic Franciscans from 1769 to 1823 for the purpose of protecting Spain's territory by settlements and converting the Californian Native Americans to a Christian religion .
Revised:  The Missions were religious outposts established by Spanish Catholic Franciscans from 1769 to 1823 for the purpose of protecting Spain's territory by settlements and converting the Californian Native Americans to Catholicism .
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Original: He also has been called the father of the school of political realism, which views the political behavior of individuals and the subsequent outcomes of relations between states as ultimately mediated by, and constructed upon, the emotions of fear and self-interest.
Revised: He also has been called the father of the school of political realism, which views the political behavior of individuals and the subsequent outcomes of relations between states as ultimately mediated by, and constructed upon, fear and self-interest.
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Original:  Another Thucydides lived before the historian and was also linked with Thrace, making a family connection between them very likely as well. upright=2.0| Thucydides Mosaic from Jerash, Jordan, Roman, 3rd century AD at the Pergamon Museum in Berlin Critical interpretation Bust of Thucydides residing in the Royal Ontario Museum, Toronto
Revised:  Another Thucydides lived before the historian and was also linked with Thrace, making a family connection between them very likely as well. Thucydides Mosaic from Jerash, Jordan, Roman, 3rd century AD at the Pergamon Museum in Berlin Critical interpretation Bust of Thucydides residing in the Royal Ontario Museum, Toronto
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Original:  Another Thucydides lived before the historian and was also linked with Thrace, making a family connection between them very likely as well. upright=2.0| Thucydides Mosaic from Jerash, Jordan, Roman, 3rd century AD at the Pergamon Museum in Berlin Critical interpretation Bust of Thucydides residing in the Royal Ontario Museum, Toronto
Revised:  Another Thucydides lived before the historian and was also linked with Thrace, making a family connection between them very likely as well. upright=2.0| Thucydides Mosaic from Jerash, Jordan, Roman, 3rd century AD at the Pergamon Museum in Berlin Critical interpretation upBust of Thucydides residing in the Royal Ontario Museum, Toronto
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Original:   Awards Cultural Center of the Philippines (CCP) Gawad CCP Pambansang Alagad ng Sining sa Panitikan (1991) U.P. Vanguard Life Achievement Award for Literature (1991) Cornelio Valdeez Award (1992) Sen. Heherson T. Alvarez Award for Literature (1994) Pedro Bucaneg Award 
Revised:  Awards Cultural Center of the Philippines (CCP) Gawad CCP Pambansang Alagad ng Sining sa Panitikan (1991) U.P. Vanguard Life Achievement Award for Literature (1991) Cornelio Valdeez Award (1992) Sen. Heherson T. Alvarez Award for Literature (1994) Pedro Bucaneg Award References
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Original:  The French visited the colony in 1689 and destroyed it completely, the buildings and sugar-mills were burned and the slaves were taken away to French colonies.
Revised:  The French assaulted the colony in 1689 and destroyed it completely, the buildings and sugar-mills were burned and the slaves were taken away to French colonies.
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Original:  A new, and more serious colonization attempt began 1650 , when under the command of the Dutch West India Company, plantations were set up on which African slaves were forced to work.
Revised:  A new, and more serious colonization attempt began in the 1650s , when under the command of the Dutch West India Company, plantations were set up on which African slaves were forced to work.
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Original:  Now the Pomeroon was part of the Dutch colony Essequibo and Demerara.
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Original:  At the Peace treaty of Amiens the colony was returned to the Dutch but it was reclaimed by the British within a year.
Revised:  At the Peace treaty of Amiens the colony was returned to the Dutch , It was reclaimed by the British within a year.
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Original:  At the Peace treaty of Amiens the colony was returned to the Dutch but it was reclaimed by the British within a year.
Revised:  At the Peace treaty of Amiens the colony was returned to the Dutch but it was reclaimed by the British the next year.
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Original:  His family had fallen on hard times and was forced to sell its property to educate its sons;
Revised:  His family had fallen on hard times and was forced to sell its properties to educate its sons;
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Original:  He reputedly had to survive part of his early life by playing the violin in disreputable theatres.
Revised:  He reputedly had to survive part of his early life by playing the violin in theatres.
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Original:  Feng Gong: Chinese actor, xiangsheng performer, Feng Guozhang's great grandson.
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Original:  He served as President of the Republic of China in an acting capacity from 1917 to 1918, and previously held the office of Vice-President and then President of the Republic of China.
Revised:  He held the office of Vice-President and then President of the Republic of China.
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Original:  馮道芬; Karena Apple Feng: political-religious consultant;
Revised:  馮道芬; Karena Apple Feng: political consultant;
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Original:  At National level there are National Youth Councils which are similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often  there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organizations case by case an example of which is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
Revised:  At national level there are National Youth Councils which are similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organizations case by case an example of which is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
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Original:  At National level there are National Youth Councils which are similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often  there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organizations case by case an example of which is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
Revised:  At National level there are National Youth Councils many of which have similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organizations case by case an example of which is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
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Original:  At National level there are National Youth Councils which are similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often  there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organizations case by case an example of which is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
Revised:  At National level there are National Youth Councils which are similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often Often there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organizations case by case an example of which is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
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Original:  At National level there are National Youth Councils which are similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often  there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organizations case by case an example of which is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
Revised:  At National level there are National Youth Councils which are similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organisations case by case an example of which is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
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Original:  At National level there are National Youth Councils which are similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often  there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organizations case by case an example of which is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
Revised:  At National level there are National Youth Councils which are similar structures to the European Youth Forum and often there are regional and local council which adopts various kind of constituencies and organizations case by case . An example of this is the Scottish Youth Parliament.
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Original:  Some youth councils are for each constituency just like the Dartford Youth Council in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  Some youth councils are for each constituency such as the Dartford Youth Council in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Additionally, some youth councils, for example the Greek Youth Parliament allows for the participation not only of youth from within the country, but also  countries with large Greek communities such as Germany and Australia.
Revised:  Additionally, some youth councils, for example the Greek Youth Parliament allows for the participation not only of youth from within the country, but also from countries with large Greek communities such as Germany and Australia.
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Original:  500  are members of an umbrella born in 1991 and called Anacej (National Association of youth and children councils)
Revised:  500 of these are members of an umbrella born in 1991 and called Anacej (National Association of youth and children councils)
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Original:  500  are members of an umbrella born in 1991 and called Anacej (National Association of youth and children councils)
Revised:  500 are members of an umbrella organsation created in 1991 and called Anacej (National Association of youth and children councils)
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Original:  500  are members of an umbrella born in 1991 and called Anacej (National Association of youth and children councils)
Revised:  500 are members of an umbrella born in 1991 called Anacej (National Association of youth and children councils)
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Original:  500  are members of an umbrella born in 1991 and called Anacej (National Association of youth and children councils)
Revised:  500 are members of an umbrella born in 1991 and called Anacej (National Association of Youth and Children Councils).
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Original:  500 of these are members of an umbrella organsation created in 1991 called Anacej (National Association of Youth and Children Councils).
Revised:  500 of these are members of an umbrella organisation created in 1991 called Anacej (National Association of Youth and Children Councils).
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Original:  It has a chairman and members of the council whom to be elected by registered voters in the URL Each chairman are entitled to become part as members of the Federation which will serve as member (ex-officio) in the local legislative bodies except for the National Federation.
Revised:  It has a chairman and members of the council who are elected by registered voters in the URL Each chairman are entitled to become part as members of the Federation which will serve as member (ex-officio) in the local legislative bodies except for the National Federation.
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Original:  It has a chairman and members of the council whom to be elected by registered voters in the URL Each chairman are entitled to become part as members of the Federation which will serve as member (ex-officio) in the local legislative bodies except for the National Federation.
Revised:  It has a chairman and members of the council whom to be elected by registered voters in each URL Each chairman are entitled to become part as members of the Federation which will serve as member (ex-officio) in the local legislative bodies except for the National Federation.
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Original:  Under the 2016 reform, a new Local Youth Development Council was formed to support the SK programs and to be composed of representatives from different youth organizations in the community including student councils, church and youth faith groups, youth-serving organizations , and community-based youth groups.
Revised:  Under the 2016 reform, a new Local Youth Development Council was formed to support the SK programs and to be composed of representatives from different youth organisations in the community including student councils, church and youth faith groups, youth-serving organizations , and community-based youth groups.
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Original:  Under the 2016 reform, a new Local Youth Development Council was formed to support the SK programs and to be composed of representatives from different youth organizations in the community including student councils, church and youth faith groups, youth-serving organizations , and community-based youth groups.
Revised:  Under the 2016 reform, a new Local Youth Development Council was formed to support the SK programs and to be composed of representatives from different youth organizations in the community including student councils, church and youth faith groups, youth-serving organisations , and community-based youth groups.
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Original:  "The LYDC aims to harmonize, broaden and strengthen all programs and initiatives of the local government and non-governmental organizations for the youth sector," said Senator Bam Aquino, then chairman of the Senate Committee on Youth and co-author of the reform URL
Revised:  "The LYDC aims to harmonize, broaden and strengthen all programs and initiatives of the local government and non-governmental organisations for the youth sector," said Senator Bam Aquino, then chairman of the Senate Committee on Youth and co-author of the reform URL
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Original: Europe In Europe there is a consolidated tradition of representative youth platforms at Pan-regional, National and local level .
Revised: Europe In Europe there is a consolidated tradition of representative youth platforms at pan-regional, national, and local levels .
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Original:  At European level  the European Youth Forum constitutes the platforms which gathers more than 93 National Youth Council and International Non-Governmental Youth Organizations.
Revised:  At European level , the European Youth Forum constitutes the platforms which gathers more than 93 National Youth Council and International Non-Governmental Youth Organizations.
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Original:  It 's a non-governmental structure which serves its members and applies the principles of democratic representation , transparency through its internal democratic system (election of the board and the president).
Revised:  It 's a non-governmental structure which serves its members and applies the principles of democratic representation and transparency through its internal democratic system (election of the board and the president).
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Original:  At the Institutional level, the Council of Europe has a specific co-managed system to run its youth sector.
Revised:  At the institutional level, the Council of Europe has a specific co-managed system to run its youth sector.
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Original:  Governmental and non-Governmental representative co-decide upon the priorities of the youth program of the institution and they also co-manage the activities which are run in two youth centres in Strasbourg and Budapest.
Revised:  Governmental and non-Governmental representative co-decide upon the priorities of the youth program of the institution and they also co-manage activities which are run in two youth centres in Strasbourg and Budapest.
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Original:  Youth councils exist on local, state, provincial, regional, national, and international levels among governments, non governmental organizations (NGO ), schools, and other entities.
Revised:  Youth councils exist on local, state, provincial, regional, national, and international levels among governments, non governmental organisations (NGOs ), schools, and other entities.
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