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Original:  Debate In geology the debate of the millennia concerns the use of myr remains open concerning " the use of Myr plus Mya" versus "using Mya only " . In either case the term Ma is used in geology literature conforming to ISO 31-1 (now ISO 80000-3) and NIST 811 recommended practices.
Revised:  Debate In geology the debate of the millennia concerns the use of myr remains open concerning the use of Myr plus Mya" versus "using Mya only " . In either case the term Ma is used in geology literature conforming to ISO 31-1 (now ISO 80000-3) and NIST 811 recommended practices.
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Original:  Debate In geology a debate remains open concerning the use of Myr (duration) plus Ma (million years ago) versus using only the term Ma. In either case the term Ma is used in geology literature conforming to ISO 31-1 (now ISO 80000-3) and NIST 811 recommended practices.
Revised:  Debate In geology a debate remains closed concerning the use of Myr (duration) plus Ma (million years ago) versus using only the term Ma. In either case the term Ma is used in geology literature conforming to ISO 31-1 (now ISO 80000-3) and NIST 811 recommended practices.
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Original:  Debate In geology a debate remains closed concerning the use of Myr (duration) plus Ma (million years ago) versus using only the term Ma. In either case the term Ma is used in geology literature conforming to ISO 31-1 (now ISO 80000-3) and NIST 811 recommended practices.
Revised:  Debate In geology a debate remains open concerning the use of Myr (duration) plus Ma (million years ago) versus using only the term Ma. In either case the term Ma is used in geology literature conforming to ISO 31-1 (now ISO 80000-3) and NIST 811 recommended practices.
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Original: Usage Myr ( Million years) is in common use in fields such as Earth science and cosmology.
Revised: Usage Myr ( million years) is in common use in fields such as Earth science and cosmology.
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Original:  Myr is also used as with MYA ("Million Years Ago" ).
Revised:  Myr is also used with 'mya' (million years ago ).
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Original:  The Bookseller: National 'non-fiction day' planned for November External links Official National Non-Fiction Day website Children's non-fiction authors
Revised:  The Bookseller: National 'non-fiction day' planned for November External links National Non-Fiction Day website Children's non-fiction authors
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Original: The competition will launch on November 1st and closing on the 30th November.
Revised: The competition will launch on 1 November and closing on the 30th November.
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Original: The competition will launch on November 1st and closing on the 30th November.
Revised: The competition will launch on November 1st and closing on 30 November.
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Original: This year (2013) NNFD is working with the Chris Lloyd, author of the amazing What on Earth books and wallbooks, and book groups, schools and individuals can enter a competition to design their own wallbook featuring their choice of the top 10 scientific inventions/discoveries.
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Original:  The NSSM has originated as National Tell-A-Story Week in 1974, the idea of Pat Triggs, Vice-Chair of The Federation of Children's Book Groups at the time.
Revised: History The NSSM has originated as National Tell-A-Story Week in 1974, the idea of Pat Triggs, Vice-Chair of The Federation of Children's Book Groups at the time.
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Original:  In 1998 it was decided to extend the idea to one month and the event became the National Share-A-Story Month .
Revised:  In 1998 it was decided to extend the idea to one month and the event became the National Share-A-Story Month 
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Original: National Share-a-Story Month (NSSM) is an annual event in the United Kingdom that is used to promote reading to children. www.national-awareness-days.com/national-share-a-story-month.html .
Revised: National Share-a-Story Month (NSSM) is an annual event in the United Kingdom that is used to promote reading to children. .
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Original: National Share-a-Story Month (NSSM) is an annual event in the United Kingdom that is used to promote reading to children. www.national-awareness-days.com/national-share-a-story-month.html .
Revised: National Share-a-Story Month (NSSM) is an annual event in the United Kingdom that is used to promote reading to children. www.national-awareness-days.com/national-share-a-story-month.html 
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Original:  Local groups of The Federation of Children's Book Groups often hold special events to celebrate the month, such as author visits, book readings and other activitiesWords for Life: National Share a Story month .
Revised:  Local groups of The Federation of Children's Book Groups often hold special events to celebrate the month, such as author visits, book readings and other activities .
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Original:  Today, few such examples remain, but some can be seen in the North Meadow at Cricklad
Revised:  Today, few such examples remain, but some can be seen in the North Meadow at Cricklade
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Original:  A Hay Lot is a  marker, usually of stone,  used in early agriculture to mark the position of an individual hay lot or allotment within a hay meadow.
Revised:  A Hay Lot is a marker, usually of stone, was used in early agriculture to mark the position of an individual hay lot or allotment within a hay meadow.
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Original:  A Hay Lot is a  marker, usually of stone,  used in early agriculture to mark the position of an individual hay lot or allotment within a hay meadow.
Revised:  A Hay Lot is a marker, usually of stone, used in early agriculture to mark the position of an individual hay lot within a hay meadow.
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Original:  Today, few such examples remain, but some can be seen in the North Meadow at Cricklade  
Revised:  Today, few such examples remain, but some can be seen in the North Meadow at Cricklade . 
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Original:  Types of fecal incontinence that produce a liquid leakage could be thought of as a type of rectal discharge.
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Original:  This type of lesion may not cause discharge intrinsically, but instead  allow transit of liquid stool components and mucus.
Revised:  This type of lesion may not cause discharge intrinsically, but instead , allow transit of liquid stool components and mucus.
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Original:  Perianal tumours can also discharge when they fungate , or otherwise become cystic or necrotic.
Revised:  Perianal tumours can also discharge when they fungate or otherwise become cystic or necrotic.
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Original:  When symptomatic, these usually appear 5–7 days post exposure . Discharge is the most common symptom, and it is usually a brownish mucopurulent consistency.
Revised:  When symptomatic, these usually appear 5–7 days post-exposure . Discharge is the most common symptom, and it is usually a brownish mucopurulent consistency.
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Original: Tatiana Santo Domingo Rechulski ;
Revised: Tatiana Santo Domingo Rechulski (
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Original: Monegasque people of Colombian descent Category:American people of Brazilian descent Category:American people of Colombian descent Category:Monegasque philanthropists Category:People from Geneva Category:People from New York City Category:People from São Paulo Category:People from Rio de Janeiro (city) Category:Former United States citizens Tatiana Category:American socialites Category:Alumni of Institut Le Rosey Category:International School of Geneva alum
Revised: Monegasque people of Colombian descent Category:American people of Brazilian descent Category:American people of Colombian descent Category:Monegasque philanthropists Category:People from Geneva Category:People from New York City Category:People from São Paulo Category:People from Rio de Janeiro (city) Category:Former United States citizens Tatiana Category:American socialites Category:Alumni of Institut Le Rosey Category:International School of Geneva alumni Category: monegasque peop
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Original:  She is close friends with socialites such as Charlotte Casiraghi, Eugenie Niarchos, Gaia Repossi and Margherita Missoni.
Revised:  She is close friends with socialites such as Charlotte Casiraghi, Eugenie Niarchos, and Margherita Missoni.
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Original: In 2018, Tatiana Casiraghi ranked #1103 on the Forbes World's Billionaires list, with wealth listed at US$2.2 URL Santo Domingo gave birth to a son named Alexandre Andrea StefanoBunte p.31, October 10, 2013.
Revised: In 2018, Tatiana Casiraghi ranked #1103 on the Forbes World's Billionaires list, with wealth listed at US$2.2 billion. Santo Domingo gave birth to a son named Alexandre Andrea StefanoBunte p.31, October 10, 2013.
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Original:  The children are in the line of succession to the Monegasque URL
Revised:  The children are in the line of succession to the Monegasque throne.
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Original:  She is fluent in Spanish, French, English, Portuguese and Italian.
Revised:  She is fluent in French, English, Portuguese and Italian.
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Original:  Prior to their wedding, she had already accompanied Casiraghi at some of most important social events in Monaco, such as the Rose Ball, the enthronement of his uncle Prince Albert II of Monaco, the Monaco Grand Prix  and the wedding of Prince Albert and Charlene Wittstock.
Revised:  Prior to their wedding, she had already accompanied Casiraghi at some of most important social events in Monaco, such as the Rose Ball, the enthronement of his uncle Prince Albert II of Monaco, the Monaco Grand Prix , and the wedding of Prince Albert and Charlene Wittstock.
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Original: All around the world , from the arctic to the tropics, there is a crisis in the world's fisheries.sciencemag.org Worm, Boris, et. a;. "Impacts of Biodiversity Loss on Ocean Ecosystem Services," Science, 3 November 2006.
Revised: Across the world there is a crisis in the world's fisheries.sciencemag.org Worm, Boris, et. a;. "Impacts of Biodiversity Loss on Ocean Ecosystem Services," Science, 3 November 2006.
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Original:  Until fairly recently it was assumed that our marine resources were limitless.
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Original:  In recent years however, an accelerating decline has been observed in the productivity of many important fisheries.
Revised:  In recent yearsan accelerating decline has been observed in the productivity of many important fisheries.
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Original:  Unlike the logistic (Schaefer) model, MSY has been refined in most modern fisheries models and occurs at around 30\% Thorpe 2015 of the unexploited population size.
Revised:  Unlike the logistic (Schaefer) model, MSY has been refined in most modern fisheries models and occurs at around 30\% of the unexploited population size.
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Original:  Hjort et al 1933 It increased in popularity in the 1950s with the advent of surplus-production models with explicitly estimate MSY. As an apparently simple and logical management goal, combined with the lack of other simple management goals of the time, MSY was adopted as the primary management goal by several international organizations (e.g., IWC, IATTC,IATTC, Inter-American Tropical Tuna Commission ICCAT, ICNAF), and individual countries.
Revised:  It increased in popularity in the 1950s with the advent of surplus-production models with explicitly estimate MSY. As an apparently simple and logical management goal, combined with the lack of other simple management goals of the time, MSY was adopted as the primary management goal by several international organizations (e.g., IWC, IATTC,IATTC, Inter-American Tropical Tuna Commission ICCAT, ICNAF), and individual countries.
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Original:  Mace 2001 Between 1949 and 1955, the U.S. maneuvered to have MSY declared the goal of international fisheries management (Johnson 2007).
Revised:  Between 1949 and 1955, the U.S. maneuvered to have MSY declared the goal of international fisheries management (Johnson 2007).
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Original:  Botsford et al 1997 Some managers began to use more conservative quota recommendations, but the influence of the MSY model for fisheries management still prevailed.
Revised:  Some managers began to use more conservative quota recommendations, but the influence of the MSY model for fisheries management still prevailed.
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Original:  Even while the scientific community was beginning to question the appropriateness and effectiveness of MSY as a management goal, Sissenwine 1978 it was incorporated into the 1982 United Nations Convention for the Law of the Sea, thus ensuring its integration into national and international fisheries acts and laws.
Revised:  Even while the scientific community was beginning to question the appropriateness and effectiveness of MSY as a management goal, it was incorporated into the 1982 United Nations Convention for the Law of the Sea, thus ensuring its integration into national and international fisheries acts and laws.
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Original:  Walters and Maguire, 1996 Figure 3 shows how growth rate varies with population density.
Revised:  Figure 3 shows how growth rate varies with population density.
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Original:  For a more contemporary description of MSY and its calculation see Maunder 2008 Across the world there is a crisis in the world's fisheries.sciencemag.org Worm, Boris, et. a;. "Impacts of Biodiversity Loss on Ocean Ecosystem Services," Science, 3 November 2006.
Revised:  For a more contemporary description of MSY and its calculation see Across the world there is a crisis in the world's fisheries.sciencemag.org Worm, Boris, et. a;. "Impacts of Biodiversity Loss on Ocean Ecosystem Services," Science, 3 November 2006.
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Original:  Clark 1973 Recent assessments by the United Nations Food and Agriculture Organization (FAO) of the state of the world's fisheries indicate a levelling off of landings in the 1990s, at about 100 million tons.
Revised:  Recent assessments by the United Nations Food and Agriculture Organization (FAO) of the state of the world's fisheries indicate a levelling off of landings in the 1990s, at about 100 million tons.
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Original:  Notes References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bolden, E.G., Robinson, W.L. (1999), Wildlife ecology and management 4th ed.
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bolden, E.G., Robinson, W.L. (1999), Wildlife ecology and management 4th ed.
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Original:  Notes References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bolden, E.G., Robinson, W.L. (1999), Wildlife ecology and management 4th ed.
Revised:  Notes %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bolden, E.G., Robinson, W.L. (1999), Wildlife ecology and management 4th ed.
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Original:  Prentice-Hall, Inc. Upper Saddle River, NJ. Christy, F.T., and Scott, A.D. (1965), The common Wealth in Ocean Fisheries, Johns Hopkins Press, Baltimore%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Clark, C.W. (1990), Mathematical Bioeconomics: The Optimal Management of Renewable Resources, 2nd ed.
Revised:  Prentice-Hall, Inc. Upper Saddle River, NJ. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Clark, C.W. (1990), Mathematical Bioeconomics: The Optimal Management of Renewable Resources, 2nd ed.
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Original:  Malden, MA.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Milner-Gulland, E.J., Mace, R. (1998), Conservation of biological resources Wiley-Blackwell. . Roberts, C. (2007), The Unnatural History of the Sea, Island Press.
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Original:  Townsend, C.R., Begon, M., and Harper, J.L. (2008), Essentials of Ecology Blackwell Publishing.
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Original: 2014 ACC/AHA Perioperative Guidelines stated that two newer tools have been created by the American College of Surgeons, which prospectively collected data on operations performed in more than 525 participating hospitals in the United States.
Revised: 2014 ACC/AHA Perioperative Guidelines states that two newer tools have been created by the American College of Surgeons, which prospectively collected data on operations performed in more than 525 participating hospitals in the United States.
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Original:  Data on more than 1 million operations have been used to create these risk calculators 4 See also ASA physical status classification system Category:Anesthesia Category:Surgery Category:Patient safety 4.
Revised:  Data on more than 1 million operations have been used to create these risk calculators See also ASA physical status classification system Category:Anesthesia Category:Surgery Category:Patient safety 4.
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Original:  Data on more than 1 million operations have been used to create these risk calculators 4 See also ASA physical status classification system Category:Anesthesia Category:Surgery Category:Patient safety 4.
Revised:  Data on more than 1 million operations have been used to create these risk calculators 4 ASA physical status classification system Category:Anesthesia Category:Surgery Category:Patient safety 4.
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Original:  Data on more than 1 million operations have been used to create these risk calculators 4 See also ASA physical status classification system Category:Anesthesia Category:Surgery Category:Patient safety 4.
Revised:  Data on more than 1 million operations have been used to create these risk calculators 4 See also ASA physical status classification system Category:Anesthesia Category:Surgery Category:Patient 4.
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Original: 2014 ACC/AHA Perioperative Guidelines states that two newer tools have been created by the American College of Surgeons, which prospectively collected data on operations performed in more than 252 participating hospitals in the United States.
Revised: 2014 ACC/AHA Perioperative Guidelines stated that two newer tools have been created by the American College of Surgeons, which prospectively collected data on operations performed in more than 252 participating hospitals in the United States.
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Original:  History of cerebrovascular disease (stroke or transient ischemic attack) 4. History of diabetes requiring preoperative insulin use 5. Chronic kidney disease ( creatinine > 2 mg/dL ) 6. Undergoing suprainguinal vascular, intraperitoneal, or intrathoracic surgery Risk for cardiac death, nonfatal myocardial infarction, and nonfatal cardiac arrest: 0 predictors = 0.4\%, 1 predictor = 0.9\%, 2 predictors = 6.6\%, ≥3 predictors = >11\%
Revised:  History of cerebrovascular disease (stroke or transient ischemic attack) 4. History of diabetes requiring preoperative insulin use 5. Chronic kidney disease creatinine > 2 mg/dL ) 6. Undergoing suprainguinal vascular, intraperitoneal, or intrathoracic surgery Risk for cardiac death, nonfatal myocardial infarction, and nonfatal cardiac arrest: 0 predictors = 0.4\%, 1 predictor = 0.9\%, 2 predictors = 6.6\%, ≥3 predictors = >11\%
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Original: External links Unofficial website (in Spanish) Interview with Miguel Zubieta Miranda (in Spanish) Bolivian miners reject foreign investors (BBC News, 2002) Further reading Herbert Klein, A Concise History of Bolivia (Cambridge University Press, 2003).
Revised:  Further reading Herbert Klein, A Concise History of Bolivia (Cambridge University Press, 2003).
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Original: 200px|FSTMB demonstration, June 2005.
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Original:  Life span studies of atomic bomb survivors The LSS population went through several changes: 1945  There were some 93,000 individuals, either living in Hiroshima or Nagasaki, Japan ;
Revised:  Life span studies of atomic bomb survivors The LSS population went through several changes: 1945 - There were some 93,000 individuals, either living in Hiroshima or Nagasaki, Japan ;
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Original:  Life span studies of atomic bomb survivors The LSS population went through several changes: 1945  There were some 93,000 individuals, either living in Hiroshima or Nagasaki, Japan ;
Revised:  Life span studies of atomic bomb survivors The LSS population went through several changes: 1945 There were some 93,000 individuals, either living in Hiroshima or Nagasaki, Japan .
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Original:  1950  An additional 37,000 were registered by this time, for a total of 130,000 LSS members.
Revised:  1950 - An additional 37,000 were registered by this time, for a total of 130,000 LSS members.
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Original:  These comparisons show that the doses that were received by the LSS population overlap strongly with the doses that are of concern to NASA Exploration mission (i.e., 50 to 2,000 mSv ). +Table 1. Number of persons, Cancer Deaths, and Non-cancer Deaths for Different Dose Groups in the Life Span StudyDS86 Weighted Colon Dose, mSvTotal0-5050-100100-200200-500500-1,0001,000-2,000>2,000No.
Revised:  These comparisons show that the doses that were received by the LSS population overlap strongly with the doses that are of concern to NASA Exploration mission (i.e., 50 to 2,000 milliSieverts (mSv) ). +Table 1. Number of persons, Cancer Deaths, and Non-cancer Deaths for Different Dose Groups in the Life Span StudyDS86 Weighted Colon Dose, mSvTotal0-5050-100100-200200-500500-1,0001,000-2,000>2,000No.
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Original:  These types of analysis lend confidence to risk assessments as well as show the limitations of such data sets.
Revised:  These types of analysis lend confidence to risk assessments as well as showing the limitations of such data sets.
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Original:  Of special interest to NASA is the  age at exposure dependence of low-LET cancer risk projections.
Revised:  Of special interest to NASA is the age at exposure of low-LET cancer risk projections.
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Original: The LSS population went through several changes: 1945 - There were some 93,000 individuals, either living in Hiroshima or Nagasaki, Japan.
Revised: The LSS population went through several changes: 1945 – There were some 93,000 individuals, either living in Hiroshima or Nagasaki, Japan.
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Original:  1950 - An additional 37,000 were registered by this time, for a total of 130,000 LSS members.
Revised:  1950 – An additional 37,000 were registered by this time, for a total of 130,000 LSS members.
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Original: The Centre for Marine Living Resources & Ecology (CMLRE) is a research institute in Kochi, Kerala under the Ministry of Earth Sciences (MoES) , Government of India with a mandate to study the Marine Living Resources .
Revised: The Centre for Marine Living Resources & Ecology (CMLRE) is a research institute in Kochi, Kerala under the Ministry of Earth Sciences , Government of India with a mandate to study the Marine Living Resources .
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Original: The Centre for Marine Living Resources & Ecology (CMLRE) is a research institute in Kochi, Kerala under the Ministry of Earth Sciences (MoES) , Government of India with a mandate to study the Marine Living Resources .
Revised: The Centre for Marine Living Resources & Ecology (CMLRE) is a research institute in Kochi, Kerala under the Ministry of Earth Sciences (MoES) , Government of India with a mandate to study the marine living resources .
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Original:  The fast pace really gives you an adrenalin kick and the girls I play with are awesome." "If I have  chose between my two sports for Rio," she said, "I will go with basketball."
Revised:  The fast pace really gives you an adrenalin kick and the girls I play with are awesome." "If I have to chose between my two sports for Rio," she said, "I will go with basketball."
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