wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  p.171 Although there may have been some degree of press exaggeration and League of Malawi Youth protestors may have exploited the presence of the press, Southworth's claim to be impartial was damaged by his minimising the injuries suffered by protesters and the stinging attacks he made, less on the integrity of the journalists who had given evidence against the police than on his views about their personalities and apparent preconceptions about the use of force.
Revised:  p.171 Although there may have been some degree of press exaggeration and League of Malawi Youth protesters may have exploited the presence of the press, Southworth's claim to be impartial was damaged by his minimising the injuries suffered by protesters and the stinging attacks he made, less on the integrity of the journalists who had given evidence against the police than on his views about their personalities and apparent preconceptions about the use of force.
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Original: Coffey (2015), p. 186 The events of 1959 and early 1960 discredited Armitage: he lost Macleod 's confidence and seen as an obstacle to progress by Macleod and unacceptable to the Malawi Congress Party.
Revised: Coffey (2015), p. 186 The events of 1959 and early 1960 discredited Armitage: he lost McLeod 's confidence and seen as an obstacle to progress by Macleod and unacceptable to the Malawi Congress Party.
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Original: Babacar Gaye (born 31 January 1951 in Saint Louis, Senegal) is a Senegalese Army General who was the United Nations Secretary-General's Special Representative and Head of the United Nations Multidimensional Integrated Stabilization Mission in the Central African Republic (MINUSCA) until his forced resignation following repeated reports of murder and sexual abuse by solders under his command.
Revised: Babacar Gaye (born 31 January 1951 in Saint Louis, Senegal) is a Senegalese Army General who was the United Nations Secretary-General's Special Representative and Head of the United Nations Multidimensional Integrated Stabilization Mission in the Central African Republic (MINUSCA) until his forced resignation following repeated reports of murder and sexual abuse by soldiers under his command.
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Original:  In August 2010, he was appointed by United Nations Secretary-General Ban Ki-moon as the Military Advisor for Peacekeeping Operations in New York UN Headquarters replacing Nigeria’s Lieutenant General Chikadibia Isaac Obiakor.
Revised:  2010, he was appointed by United Nations Secretary-General Ban Ki-moon as the Military Advisor for Peacekeeping Operations in New York UN Headquarters replacing Nigeria’s Lieutenant General Chikadibia Isaac Obiakor.
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Original:  is a Senegalese Army General who was the  United Nations Secretary-General's Special Representative and Head of the United Nations Multidimensional Integrated Stabilization Mission in the Central African Republic (MINUSCA) until his forced resignation following repeated reports of murder and sexual abuse by soldiers, including the rape a 12-year-old girl and the sexual exploitation of hungry children as young as 8 who were forced to perform terrible sex acts for food, under his command.
Revised:  is a Senegalese Army General who was the former United Nations Secretary-General's Special Representative and Head of the United Nations Multidimensional Integrated Stabilization Mission in the Central African Republic (MINUSCA) until his forced resignation following repeated reports of murder and sexual abuse by soldiers, including the rape a 12-year-old girl and the sexual exploitation of hungry children as young as 8 who were forced to perform terrible sex acts for food, under his command.
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Original: Cross-cutting factors Aside from the four main factors (R-O-A-M), UNESCO has also identified five different cross-cutting factors that will suit in all of the R-O-A-M factors, and should be taken into consideration.
Revised: Cross-cutting factors Aside from the four main factors (R-O-A-M), UNESCO has also identified five different cross-cutting factors that will suit all of the R-O-A-M factors, and should be taken into consideration.
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Original:  The indicators are divided into three different groups: quantitative indicators, qualitative indicators and institutional indicators (which concerns with constitutional and legal arrangements).
Revised:  The indicators are divided into three different groups: quantitative indicators, qualitative indicators and institutional indicators (which concerns constitutional and legal arrangements).
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Original:  This has raise questions about the credibility of the indicators, as well as the difficulty of actually carrying out the research.
Revised:  This has raised questions about the credibility of the indicators, as well as the difficulty of actually carrying out the research.
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Original:  Also, due to difference in data availability, it could be difficult to give a fair assessment to all indicators for all countries involved.
Revised:  Due to differences in data availability, it could be difficult to give a fair assessment to all indicators for all countries involved.
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Original:  Other challenges that it faces include different definitions of terms like 'broadband', as well as the fact that most data are held by private companies and are not available as a result.
Revised:  Other challenges that it faces include different definitions of terms like 'broadband', as well as the fact that most of the data is held by private companies and are not available as a result.
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Original:  Other challenges that it faces include different definitions of terms like 'broadband', as well as the fact that most data are held by private companies and are not available as a result.
Revised:  Other challenges that it faces include different definitions of terms like 'broadband', as well as the fact that most data are held by private companies and is not publicly available as a result.
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Original: Internet Universality is the concept that "the Internet is much more than infrastructure and applications, it is a network of economic and social interactions and relationships, which has the potential to enable human rights, empower individuals and communities, and facilitate sustainable development.
Revised: Internet universality is the concept that "the Internet is much more than infrastructure and applications, it is a network of economic and social interactions and relationships, which has the potential to enable human rights, empower individuals and communities, and facilitate sustainable development.
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Original:  Through the concept internet universality UNESCO highlights four separate but interdependent fields of Internet policy and practice that are considered a "key" to assess a better Internet environment;
Revised:  Through the concept of internet universality, UNESCO highlights four separate but interdependent fields of Internet policy and practice that are considered a "key" to assess a better Internet environment;
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Original:  Through the concept internet universality UNESCO highlights four separate but interdependent fields of Internet policy and practice that are considered a "key" to assess a better Internet environment;
Revised:  Through the concept internet universality UNESCO highlights four separate but interdependent fields of Internet policy and practice that are considered "key" to assess a better Internet environment;
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Original:  R. Agora Slovene ORF, Radio Agora ORF Burgenland, Wien Croatian, Hungarian, Czech, Slovak, Romani ORF CFYK Yellowknife Chipewyan, Dogrib, South Slavey CBC North CHAK Inuvik Gwich’in, Inuvialuktun, North Slavey CFFB Nunavut Inuktitut CBFG Chisasibi Cree (see also Ethnic broadcasting in China) CNR et al.
Revised:  R. Agora Slovene ORF, Radio Agora ORF Burgenland, Wien Croatian, Hungarian, Czech, Slovak, Romani ORF CFYK Yellowknife Chipewyan, Dogrib, South Slavey CBC North CHAK Inuvik Gwich’in, Inuvialuktun, North Slavey CFFB Nunavut Inuktitut CBFG Chisasibi Cree (see also Ethnic broadcasting in China) CNR 
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Original:  Kyrgyz, Mongolian,
Revised:  Mongolian,
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Original:  Karelian, Veps  GTRK Komi Gor Komi  GTRK Mari El Mari  GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha  GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt  GTRK Buryatia Buryat  GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk  GTRK Sakha Yakut  GTRK Altai Altai  GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar  GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash  Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar  GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Karelian, Veps Viestit GTRK Komi Gor Komi GTRK Mari El Mari GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt GTRK Buryatia Buryat GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk GTRK Sakha Yakut GTRK Altai Altai GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Karelian, Veps  GTRK Komi Gor Komi  GTRK Mari El Mari  GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha  GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt  GTRK Buryatia Buryat  GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk  GTRK Sakha Yakut  GTRK Altai Altai  GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar  GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash  Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar  GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Karelian, Veps GTRK Komi Gor Komi GTRK Mari El Mari GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha Национальное вещание GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt GTRK Buryatia Buryat GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk GTRK Sakha Yakut GTRK Altai Altai GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Karelian, Veps  GTRK Komi Gor Komi  GTRK Mari El Mari  GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha  GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt  GTRK Buryatia Buryat  GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk  GTRK Sakha Yakut  GTRK Altai Altai  GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar  GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash  Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar  GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Karelian, Veps GTRK Komi Gor Komi GTRK Mari El Mari GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt Иворъёс GTRK Buryatia Buryat GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk GTRK Sakha Yakut GTRK Altai Altai GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Karelian, Veps  GTRK Komi Gor Komi  GTRK Mari El Mari  GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha  GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt  GTRK Buryatia Buryat  GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk  GTRK Sakha Yakut  GTRK Altai Altai  GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar  GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash  Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar  GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Karelian, Veps GTRK Komi Gor Komi GTRK Mari El Mari GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt GTRK Buryatia Buryat bgtrk.ru GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk GTRK Sakha Yakut GTRK Altai Altai GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Karelian, Veps  GTRK Komi Gor Komi  GTRK Mari El Mari  GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha  GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt  GTRK Buryatia Buryat  GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk  GTRK Sakha Yakut  GTRK Altai Altai  GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar  GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash  Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar  GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Karelian, Veps GTRK Komi Gor Komi GTRK Mari El Mari GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt GTRK Buryatia Buryat GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk GTRK Sakha Yakut gtrksakha.ru GTRK Altai Altai GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Karelian, Veps  GTRK Komi Gor Komi  GTRK Mari El Mari  GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha  GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt  GTRK Buryatia Buryat  GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk  GTRK Sakha Yakut  GTRK Altai Altai  GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar  GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash  Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar  GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Karelian, Veps GTRK Komi Gor Komi GTRK Mari El Mari GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt GTRK Buryatia Buryat GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk GTRK Sakha Yakut GTRK Altai Altai vesti22.tv GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Karelian, Veps  GTRK Komi Gor Komi  GTRK Mari El Mari  GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha  GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt  GTRK Buryatia Buryat  GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk  GTRK Sakha Yakut  GTRK Altai Altai  GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar  GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash  Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar  GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Karelian, Veps GTRK Komi Gor Komi GTRK Mari El Mari GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt GTRK Buryatia Buryat GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk GTRK Sakha Yakut GTRK Altai Altai GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar Яңалыклар GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Karelian, Veps  GTRK Komi Gor Komi  GTRK Mari El Mari  GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha  GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt  GTRK Buryatia Buryat  GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk  GTRK Sakha Yakut  GTRK Altai Altai  GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar  GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash  Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar  GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Karelian, Veps GTRK Komi Gor Komi GTRK Mari El Mari GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt GTRK Buryatia Buryat GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk GTRK Sakha Yakut GTRK Altai Altai GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Вести Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Karelian, Veps  GTRK Komi Gor Komi  GTRK Mari El Mari  GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha  GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt  GTRK Buryatia Buryat  GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk  GTRK Sakha Yakut  GTRK Altai Altai  GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar  GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash  Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar  GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Karelian, Veps GTRK Komi Gor Komi GTRK Mari El Mari GTRK Mordovia Erzya, Moksha GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt GTRK Buryatia Buryat GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk GTRK Sakha Yakut GTRK Altai Altai GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar 1tvcrimea.ru GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Moksha Национальное вещание GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt Иворъёс GTRK Buryatia Buryat bgtrk.ru GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk хальмг келн GTRK Sakha Yakut gtrksakha.ru GTRK Altai Altai vesti22.tv GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar Яңалыклар GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Вести Чăваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar 1tvcrimea.ru GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Moksha Национальное вещание GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt Иворъёс GTRK Buryatia Buryat bgtrk.ru GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk хальмг келн GTRK Sakha Yakut gtrksakha.ru GTRK Altai Altai vesti22.tv GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar Яңалыклар GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Вести Чӑваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar 1tvcrimea.ru GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original:  Moksha Национальное вещание GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt Иворъёс GTRK Buryatia Buryat bgtrk.ru GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk хальмг келн GTRK Sakha Yakut gtrksakha.ru GTRK Altai Altai vesti22.tv GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar Яңалыклар GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Вести Чӑваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar 1tvcrimea.ru GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
Revised:  Moksha Национальное вещание GTRK Udmurtia Udmurt Иворъёс GTRK Buryatia Buryat bgtrk.ru GTRK Kalmykia Kalmyk хальмг келн GTRK Sakha Yakut gtrksakha.ru GTRK Altai Altai GTRK Khakassia Khakas Хабарлар GTRK Tuva Tuvan Медээлер Тыва черде GTRK Bashkortostan Bashkir Хәбәрҙәр GTRK Tatarstan Tatar Яңалыклар GTRK Chuvashia Chuvash Вести Чӑваш ен GTRK Krym Crimean Tatar 1tvcrimea.ru GTRK Dagestan Avar, Aghul, Chechen, Dargin, Lak, Lezgian, Rutul, Tabasaran, Tsakhur;
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Original: It should be noted that while in digital publishing , everything is done in a digital medium only , the network intervenes only at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers , while in network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
Revised: While in digital publishing , everything is done in a digital medium only , the network intervenes only at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers , while in network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
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Original: It should be noted that while in digital publishing , everything is done in a digital medium only , the network intervenes only at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers , while in network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
Revised: It should be noted that while in digital publishing everything is done in a digital medium only , the network intervenes only at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers , while in network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
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Original: It should be noted that while in digital publishing , everything is done in a digital medium only , the network intervenes only at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers , while in network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
Revised: It should be noted that while in digital publishing , everything is done in a digital medium , the network intervenes only at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers , while in network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
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Original: It should be noted that while in digital publishing , everything is done in a digital medium only , the network intervenes only at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers , while in network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
Revised: It should be noted that while in digital publishing , everything is done in a digital medium only , the network intervenes at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers , while in network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
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Original: It should be noted that while in digital publishing , everything is done in a digital medium only , the network intervenes only at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers , while in network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
Revised: It should be noted that while in digital publishing , everything is done in a digital medium only , the network intervenes only at the level of the diffusion of content, it is only used to send it to the readers . In network publishing, on the contrary, communication specific to the Internet is at the heart of the editorial process.
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Original: « Après lecture approfondie, ce corpus me semble surtout intéressant non pas pour traiter le sujet de l’éditorialisation sous ses multiples aspects (il serait très insuffisant) mais plutôt pour répondre à la question "de quoi parle-t-on aujourd’hui lorsque l’on parle d’éditorialisation ?" » Jérome Valluy, « "Editorialisation" »,Terra-HN, 18 mai 2015, En ligne : URL
Revised: « Après lecture approfondie, ce corpus me semble surtout intéressant non pas pour traiter le sujet de l’éditorialisation sous ses multiples aspects (il serait très insuffisant) mais plutôt pour répondre à la question "de quoi parle-t-on aujourd’hui lorsque l’on parle d’éditorialisation ?" » Jérome Valluy, « "Editorialisation" »,Terra-HN, 18 mai 2015, ..
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Original: , January 2016. read online . Since 2008, the concept of editorialization has been largely theorized in Francophone research, notably through the seminar "Digital Writing and URL founded in 2008 by Marcello Vitali-Rosati, Gérard Wormser, Nicolas Sauret and Anne-Laure BrisacMarcello Vitali-Rosati, "What is editorialization ?", January 2016. read online and joined in 2015 by a team from the Dicen-IDF laboratory led by Louise Merzeau.
Revised: , January 2016. (read online) . Since 2008, the concept of editorialization has been largely theorized in Francophone research, notably through the seminar "Digital Writing and URL founded in 2008 by Marcello Vitali-Rosati, Gérard Wormser, Nicolas Sauret and Anne-Laure BrisacMarcello Vitali-Rosati, "What is editorialization ?", January 2016. read online and joined in 2015 by a team from the Dicen-IDF laboratory led by Louise Merzeau.
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