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Original:  Additionally, the British government exhibited favoritism by supporting multiple Northern cultural components that further deepened the societal divide between the two regions . After their liberation in 1956, the ethnic and domestic tensions against Southern Sudan further escalated during the post colonial reconstruction.
Revised:  Additionally, the British government exhibited favoritism by supporting multiple Northern cultural components that further deepened the societal divide between the two regions . After becoming independent from colonial rule in 1956, the ethnic and domestic tensions against Southern Sudan further escalated during the post colonial reconstruction.
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Original:  Many attributed such hostilities to be the remnant of the South's colonial grievances against the British  , while others viewed it to be the Southern insurgents' attempt in challenging their ruling government.
Revised:  Many attributed such hostilities to be the remnant of the South's grievances against the British , while others viewed it to be the Southern insurgents' attempt in challenging their ruling government.
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Original:  Many attributed such hostilities to be the remnant of the South's colonial grievances against the British  , while others viewed it to be the Southern insurgents' attempt in challenging their ruling government.
Revised:  Many attributed such hostilities to be the remnant of the South's colonial grievances against the British colonial administration , while others viewed it to be the Southern insurgents' attempt in challenging their ruling government.
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Original:  Since their colonial subjection by the British , the Southern Sudanese were introduced and integrated to the principles of Western thought.
Revised:  Since the establishment of British colonial rule , the Southern Sudanese were introduced and integrated to the principles of Western thought.
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Original: The North Prior to the outbreak of the civil war, the elites of Northern Sudan had two unwavering interpretations of what led to its outbreak.
Revised:  North Prior to the outbreak of the civil war, the elites of Northern Sudan had two unwavering interpretations of what led to its outbreak.
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Original:  The South Contrarily, the Southern populace viewed the emergence of the civil war to be an inevitability.
Revised:  South Contrarily, the Southern populace viewed the emergence of the civil war to be an inevitability.
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Original:  Course of the War Escalation of Military Intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
Revised:  Course of the war Escalation of Military Intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
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Original:  Course of the War Escalation of Military Intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
Revised:  Course of the War Escalation of military intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
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Original:  October 1964 Protests Resentment at the military government built up.
Revised:  October 1964 protests Resentment at the military government built up.
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Original:  Political Turmoil In-fighting between Marxist and non-Marxist factions in the ruling military class led to another coup in July 1971 and a short-lived administration by the Sudanese Communist Party before anti-Communist factions put Nimeiry back in control of the country.
Revised:  Political turmoil In-fighting between Marxist and non-Marxist factions in the ruling military class led to another coup in July 1971 and a short-lived administration by the Sudanese Communist Party before anti-Communist factions put Nimeiry back in control of the country.
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Original:  They hoped to use diplomatic means to achieve autonomy and separation but due to their political factionalism, were ineffectual in comparison to the Anyanya Insurgency Unified Southern Front The South was first led by the late leader Aggrey Jaden;
Revised:  They hoped to use diplomatic means to achieve autonomy and separation but due to their political factionalism, were ineffectual in comparison to the Anyanya Insurgency Unified Southern front The South was first led by the late leader Aggrey Jaden;
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Original:  Aftermath / Impact Since the beginning of their independence to the Addis Ababa Agreement, five hundred thousand people, of whom only one in five was considered an armed combatant, were killed while hundreds of thousands more were forced to leave their homes.
Revised:  Aftermath and impact Since the beginning of their independence to the Addis Ababa Agreement, five hundred thousand people, of whom only one in five was considered an armed combatant, were killed while hundreds of thousands more were forced to leave their homes.
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Original:  North Prior to the outbreak of the civil war, the elites of Northern Sudan had two unwavering interpretations of what led to its outbreak.
Revised: The North Prior to the outbreak of the civil war, the elites of Northern Sudan had two unwavering interpretations of what led to its outbreak.
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Original:   South Contrarily, the Southern populace viewed the emergence of the civil war to be an inevitability.
Revised:  The South Contrarily, the Southern populace viewed the emergence of the civil war to be an inevitability.
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Original:  Course of the war Escalation of military intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
Revised:  Course of the War Escalation of military intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
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Original:  Course of the war Escalation of military intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
Revised:  Course of the war Escalation of Military Intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
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Original:  October 1964 protests Resentment at the military government built up.
Revised:  October 1964 Protests Resentment at the military government built up.
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Original:  Political turmoil In-fighting between Marxist and non-Marxist factions in the ruling military class led to another coup in July 1971 and a short-lived administration by the Sudanese Communist Party before anti-Communist factions put Nimeiry back in control of the country.
Revised:  Political Turmoil In-fighting between Marxist and non-Marxist factions in the ruling military class led to another coup in July 1971 and a short-lived administration by the Sudanese Communist Party before anti-Communist factions put Nimeiry back in control of the country.
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Original:  They hoped to use diplomatic means to achieve autonomy and separation but due to their political factionalism, were ineffectual in comparison to the Anyanya Insurgency Unified Southern front The South was first led by the late leader Aggrey Jaden;
Revised:  They hoped to use diplomatic means to achieve autonomy and separation but due to their political factionalism, were ineffectual in comparison to the Anyanya Insurgency Unified Southern Front The South was first led by the late leader Aggrey Jaden;
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Original:  Aftermath and impact Since the beginning of their independence to the Addis Ababa Agreement, five hundred thousand people, of whom only one in five was considered an armed combatant, were killed while hundreds of thousands more were forced to leave their homes.
Revised:  Aftermath / Impact Since the beginning of their independence to the Addis Ababa Agreement, five hundred thousand people, of whom only one in five was considered an armed combatant, were killed while hundreds of thousands more were forced to leave their homes.
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Original: Course of the War Escalation of Military Intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
Revised: Course of the war Escalation of Military Intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
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Original: Course of the War Escalation of Military Intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
Revised: Course of the War Escalation of military intervention The insurgents gradually developed into a secessionist movement composed of the 1955 mutineers and southern students.
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Original:  After a second military coup on 25 May 1969, Col. Gaafar Nimeiry became Prime Minister and promptly outlawed political parties.
Revised:  After a second military coup on 25 May 1969, Colonel Gaafar Nimeiry became Prime Minister and promptly outlawed political parties.
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Original:   Political Turmoil In-fighting between Marxist and non-Marxist factions in the ruling military class led to another coup in July 1971 and a short-lived administration by the Sudanese Communist Party before anti-Communist factions put Nimeiry back in control of the country.
Revised:  Political turmoil In-fighting between Marxist and non-Marxist factions in the ruling military class led to another coup in July 1971 and a short-lived administration by the Sudanese Communist Party before anti-Communist factions put Nimeiry back in control of the country.
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Original:  They hoped to use diplomatic means to achieve autonomy and separation but due to their political factionalism, were ineffectual in comparison to the Anyanya Insurgency Aftermath / Impact Since the beginning of their independence to the Addis Ababa Agreement, five hundred thousand people, of whom only one in five was considered an armed combatant, were killed while hundreds of thousands more were forced to leave their homes.
Revised:  They hoped to use diplomatic means to achieve autonomy and separation but due to their political factionalism, were ineffectual in comparison to the Anyanya Insurgency Aftermath and impact Since the beginning of their independence to the Addis Ababa Agreement, five hundred thousand people, of whom only one in five was considered an armed combatant, were killed while hundreds of thousands more were forced to leave their homes.
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Original: Therefore, the agreement proved only to be a temporary respite with no definitive means of peace keeping for the Southern Sudan.
Revised: Therefore, the agreement proved only to be a temporary respite with no definitive means of peace keeping for Southern Sudan.
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Original:  With the infringements by the north increasing social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, this led to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War . A conflict that lasted for almost 22 years and contributed to the official independence of South Sudan.
Revised:  Infringements by the north increasing social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, this led to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War . A conflict that lasted for almost 22 years and contributed to the official independence of South Sudan.
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Original:  With the infringements by the north increasing social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, this led to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War . A conflict that lasted for almost 22 years and contributed to the official independence of South Sudan.
Revised:  With the infringements by the north increased social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, this led to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War . A conflict that lasted for almost 22 years and contributed to the official independence of South Sudan.
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Original:  With the infringements by the north increasing social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, this led to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War . A conflict that lasted for almost 22 years and contributed to the official independence of South Sudan.
Revised:  With the infringements by the north increasing social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, leading to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War . A conflict that lasted for almost 22 years and contributed to the official independence of South Sudan.
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Original:  With the infringements by the north increasing social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, this led to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War . A conflict that lasted for almost 22 years and contributed to the official independence of South Sudan.
Revised:  With the infringements by the north increasing social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, this led to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War , which lasted almost 22 years and contributed to the official independence of South Sudan.
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Original:  With the infringements by the north increasing social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, this led to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War . A conflict that lasted for almost 22 years and contributed to the official independence of South Sudan.
Revised:  With the infringements by the north increasing social unrest in the south in the mid-1970s, this led to the 1983 army mutiny that sparked the Second Sudanese Civil War . A conflict that lasted for almost 22 years and contributed to the complete independence of South Sudan.
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Original:  The name Densa is a portmanteau of ( with the meaning stupider) and Mensa.
Revised:  The name Densa is a portmanteau of ( in the sense of stupider) and Mensa.
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Original:  Even within Mensa itself, a SIG (special interest group, an informal sub-group of Mensans sharing a particular common interest) has existed for Densa ;
Revised:  Even within Mensa itself, a SIG (special interest group, an informal sub-group of Mensans sharing a particular common interest) has existed for Densa ,
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Original:  Subsequent issues had additional puzzles with gags about the group , and were widely reprinted by the bulletins of other Mensa groups, before the concept of a low IQ group gained wider circulation in the 1970s, with other people creating quizzes, etc.
Revised:  Subsequent issues had additional puzzles with gags about the group and were widely reprinted by the bulletins of other Mensa groups, before the concept of a low IQ group gained wider circulation in the 1970s, with other people creating quizzes, etc.
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Original: Densa has been used as  a number of fictional organizations parodying Mensa International, the organization for highly intelligent people.
Revised: Densa has been used as the name of a number of fictional organizations parodying Mensa International, the organization for highly intelligent people.
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Original:  Not available through New York Times archival service, but available through ProQuest.
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Original:  In 1987, the band received a Rock Album of the Year GMA Dove Award for Crack the URL That same year, they received a Grammy Award for Best Gospel Performance by a Duo, Group, Choir, or URL Following his heart attack, LeFevre increasingly turned to preaching and teaching as his vocation.
Revised:  In 1987, the band received a Rock Album of the Year GMA Dove Award for Crack the URL That same year, they received a Grammy Award for Best Gospel Performance by a Duo, Group, Choir, or Chorus. Following his heart attack, LeFevre increasingly turned to preaching and teaching as his vocation.
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Original:  Retrieved May 19, 2009. URL
Revised:  Retrieved May 19, 2009. 
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Original: LeFevre's mother , Eva Mae LeFevre, died after she was hospitalized with pneumonia, in April, as well as a fractured hip, at age 91, on May 18, 2009 , in Atlanta, Georgia .
Revised: LeFevre's mother Eva Mae was hospitalized with pneumonia, in April, as well as a fractured hip, at age 91, on May 18, 2009 , in Atlanta, Georgia .
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Original: LeFevre's mother , Eva Mae LeFevre, died after she was hospitalized with pneumonia, in April, as well as a fractured hip, at age 91, on May 18, 2009 , in Atlanta, Georgia .
Revised: LeFevre's mother , Eva Mae LeFevre, died after she was hospitalized with pneumonia, as well as a fractured hip, at age 91, on May 18, 2009 , in Atlanta, Georgia .
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Original: LeFevre's mother , Eva Mae LeFevre, died after she was hospitalized with pneumonia, in April, as well as a fractured hip, at age 91, on May 18, 2009 , in Atlanta, Georgia .
Revised: LeFevre's mother , Eva Mae LeFevre, died after she was hospitalized with pneumonia, in April, as well as a fractured hip, at age 91, on May 18, 2009 in Atlanta, Georgia .
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Original: LeFevre's mother , Eva Mae LeFevre, died after she was hospitalized with pneumonia, in April, as well as a fractured hip, at age 91, on May 18, 2009 , in Atlanta, Georgia .
Revised: LeFevre's mother , Eva Mae LeFevre, died after she was hospitalized with pneumonia, in April, as well as a fractured hip, at age 91, on May 18, 2009 , in Atlanta, Georgia at age 91.
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Original:  He currently travels around the United States, ministering, teaching and singing .
Revised:  He currently travels around the United States, ministering, teaching and boning .
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Original:  From 1970 through 1980, he recorded and performed with Eric Clapton, Elton John, Billy Joel, Duane Allman, Berry Oakley, Little Richard, & the Who,Brant, Marly, Freebirds: The Lynyrd Skynyrd Story, New York, Watson-Guptill Publications, (2002) p. 76 among others .
Revised:  From 1970 through 1980, he recorded and performed with Eric Clapton, Elton John, Billy Joel, Duane Allman, Berry Oakley, Little Richard, & The Who,Brant, Marly, Freebirds: The Lynyrd Skynyrd Story, New York, Watson-Guptill Publications, (2002) p. 76 among others .
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Original:  From 1970 through 1980, he recorded and performed with Eric Clapton, Elton John, Billy Joel, Duane Allman, Berry Oakley, Little Richard, & The Who,Brant, Marly, Freebirds: The Lynyrd Skynyrd Story, New York, Watson-Guptill Publications, (2002) p. 76 among others .
Revised:  From 1970 through 1980, he recorded and performed with Eric Clapton, Elton John, Billy Joel, Duane Allman, Berry Oakley, Little Richard, & the Who,Brant, Marly, Freebirds: The Lynyrd Skynyrd Story, New York, Watson-Guptill Publications, (2002) p. 76 among others .
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Original:  From 1970 through 1980, he recorded and performed with Eric Clapton, Elton John, Billy Joel, Duane Allman, Berry Oakley, Little Richard,  the Who,Brant, Marly, Freebirds: The Lynyrd Skynyrd Story, New York, Watson-Guptill Publications, (2002) p. 76 among others.
Revised:  From 1970 through 1980, he recorded and performed with Eric Clapton, Elton John, Billy Joel, Duane Allman, Berry Oakley, Little Richard, and the Who,Brant, Marly, Freebirds: The Lynyrd Skynyrd Story, New York, Watson-Guptill Publications, (2002) p. 76 among others.
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Original: "Dog", artwork created by AI Art Media, using artificial intelligence and machine learning techniques.
Revised: File:Edmond de Belamy.png|Edmond de Belamy, an artwork generated by a generative adversarial network.
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Original:  Journées d'Informatique Musicale 2016 keynote by Shlomo Dubnov was on Information Theoretic Creativity.available at URL
Revised:  Journées d'Informatique Musicale 2016 keynote by Shlomo Dubnov was on Information Theoretic URL
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Original:  Triumph of the Cyborg Composer In early 2016, a global team of researchers explained how a new computational creativity approach known as the Digital Synaptic Neural Substrate (DSNS) could be used to generate original chess puzzles that were not derived from endgame databases.
Revised:  In early 2016, a global team of researchers explained how a new computational creativity approach known as the Digital Synaptic Neural Substrate (DSNS) could be used to generate original chess puzzles that were not derived from endgame databases.
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Original:  Chesthetica's YouTube Channel Events The International Conference on Computational Creativity (ICCC) occurs annually, organized by The Association for Computational URL Events in the series include: ICCC 2018, Salamanca, Spain ICCC 2017, Atlanta, Georgia, USA ICCC 2016, Paris, France ICCC 2015, Park City, Utah, USA. Keynote: Emily Short ICCC 2014, Ljubljana, Slovenia.
Revised:  Events The International Conference on Computational Creativity (ICCC) occurs annually, organized by The Association for Computational URL Events in the series include: ICCC 2018, Salamanca, Spain ICCC 2017, Atlanta, Georgia, USA ICCC 2016, Paris, France ICCC 2015, Park City, Utah, USA. Keynote: Emily Short ICCC 2014, Ljubljana, Slovenia.
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Original:  Chesthetica's YouTube Channel Events The International Conference on Computational Creativity (ICCC) occurs annually, organized by The Association for Computational URL Events in the series include: ICCC 2018, Salamanca, Spain ICCC 2017, Atlanta, Georgia, USA ICCC 2016, Paris, France ICCC 2015, Park City, Utah, USA. Keynote: Emily Short ICCC 2014, Ljubljana, Slovenia.
Revised:  Chesthetica's YouTube Channel Events The International Conference on Computational Creativity (ICCC) occurs annually, organized by The Association for Computational Creativity. Events in the series include: ICCC 2018, Salamanca, Spain ICCC 2017, Atlanta, Georgia, USA ICCC 2016, Paris, France ICCC 2015, Park City, Utah, USA. Keynote: Emily Short ICCC 2014, Ljubljana, Slovenia.
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Original:  Having nearly died in the cholera epidemic of 1849, in 1850 she joined the community of the Sisters of Charity at Mount St.
Revised:  Having nearly died in the cholera epidemihey c of 1849, in 1850 she joined the community of the Sisters of Charity at Mount St.
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Original: upSister Irene at the New York Foundling Hospital Sister Irene (born Catherine Rosamund Fitzgibbon;
Revised:  Sister Irene (born Catherine Rosamund Fitzgibbon;
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Original:  Sister Irene  is among the pioneers of modern adoption, establishing a system to board out children rather than institutionalize them.
Revised:  Sister Irene Sister Irene is among the pioneers of modern adoption, establishing a system to board out children rather than institutionalize them.
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Original: Society and culture Popular interest in the concept of "andropause" was fueled by the 1998 book Male Menopause , written by Jed Diamond, a licensed psychotherapist with a PhD in international health .
Revised: Society and culture The 1998 book Male Menopause , written by Jed Diamond, a licensed psychotherapist with a PhD in international health .
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Original: Society and culture Popular interest in the concept of "andropause" was fueled by the 1998 book Male Menopause , written by Jed Diamond, a licensed psychotherapist with a PhD in international health .
Revised: Society and culture Popular interest in the concept of "andropause" was fueled by the 1998 book Male Menopause by Jed Diamond, a licensed psychotherapist with a PhD in international health .
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