wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: At least 65 people were killed and over 200 injured when a train derailedin West Bengal, India.
Revised: At least 65 people were killed and over 200 injured when a train derailed in West Bengal, India.
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Original:  The train, which runs from Kolkata to Mumbai, had thirteen coaches of its coaches derailed, five of which were  struck by a freight train coming from the opposite direction.
Revised:  The train, which runs from Kolkata to Mumbai, had thirteen coaches of its coaches derailed, five of which were struck by a freight train coming in the opposite direction.
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Original:  The Conservatives' share of the vote (compared to national figures for the new constituency based on the 2005 election results) rose by 0.2\%, with the Liberal Democrats up 5\% and the Labour Party down 11.6\%.
Revised:  The Conservatives' share of the vote (compared to notional figures for the new constituency based on the 2005 election results) rose by 0.2\%, with the Liberal Democrats up 5\% and the Labour Party down 11.6\%.
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Original:  He said "Here, I guess," when asked for his address  
Revised:  He said "Here, I guess," when asked for his address . 
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Original:  One neighbour is reported to have quoted him as saying he was studying for "a PhD in murder and Jack the Ripper . "  During his five-minute court appearance he did not enter a plea, kept his head bowed and fidgeted with his cuffed hands.
Revised:  One neighbour is reported to have quoted him as saying he was studying for "a PhD in murder and Jack the Ripper , " During his five-minute court appearance he did not enter a plea, kept his head bowed and fidgeted with his cuffed hands.
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Original:  Blamires' family chose not to be present, but the victim's mother Nicky Blamires, 54, has told the press that Suzanne was a "much-loved" family member even thogh she had " taken the wrong path  ." "Nobody deserves this," she said.
Revised:  Blamires' family chose not to be present, but the victim's mother Nicky Blamires, 54, has told the press that Suzanne was a "much-loved" family member even thogh she " taken the wrong path ." "Nobody deserves this," she said.
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Original:  Blamires' family chose not to be present, but the victim's mother Nicky Blamires, 54, has told the press that Suzanne was a "much-loved" family member even thogh she had " taken the wrong path  ." "Nobody deserves this," she said.
Revised:  Blamires' family chose not to be present, but the victim's mother Nicky Blamires, 54, has told the press that Suzanne was a "much-loved" family member even thogh she had " went down the wrong path ." "Nobody deserves this," she said.
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Original:  Blamires' family chose not to be present, but the victim's mother Nicky Blamires, 54, has told the press that Suzanne was a "much-loved" family member even thogh she had " taken the wrong path  ." "Nobody deserves this," she said.
Revised:  Blamires' family chose not to be present, but the victim's mother Nicky Blamires, 54, has told the press that Suzanne was a "much-loved" family member even thogh she had " taken the wrong path and did not have the life she was meant to have ." "Nobody deserves this," she said.
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Original:  "All these girls were human beings and people's daughters.  
Revised:  "All these girls were human beings and people's daughters. " 
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Original:  British media has been quick to compare the case to Peter Sutcliffe, dubbed the "Yorkshire Ripper".
Revised: Griffiths' morning court appearance was followed by a second one this afternoon, at Bradford Crown Court. This time, he confirmed his name without incident. He was remanded into custody until next month, when he will appear in court again. British media has been quick to compare the case to Peter Sutcliffe, dubbed the "Yorkshire Ripper".
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Original:  Blamires' family chose not to be present, but the victim's mother Nicky Blamires, 54, has told the press that Suzanne was a "much-loved" family member even thogh she "went down the wrong path and did not have the life she was meant to have." "Nobody deserves this," she said.
Revised:  Blamires' family chose not to be present, but the victim's mother Nicky Blamires, 54, has told the press that Suzanne was a "much-loved" family member even though she "went down the wrong path and did not have the life she was meant to have." "Nobody deserves this," she said.
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Original:  Since his 1981 conviction he has spent most of the last three decades in Broadmoor high-security psychiatric hospital near London  
Revised:  Since his 1981 conviction he has spent most of the last three decades in Broadmoor high-security psychiatric hospital near London . 
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Original: Joe Sestak's congressional photo US Representative Joe Sestak , a Democrat from Pennsylvania, says that he was offered a job in the Obama administration if he would drop out of a Senate primary election .
Revised: US Representative , a Democrat from Pennsylvania, says that he was offered a job in the Obama administration if he would drop out of a Senate primary election .
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Original: Joe Sestak's congressional photo US Representative Joe Sestak , a Democrat from Pennsylvania, says that he was offered a job in the Obama administration if he would drop out of a Senate primary election .
Revised: Joe Sestak's congressional photo US Representative Joe Sestak , a Democrat from Pennsylvania, says that he was offered a job in the Obama administration if he would drop out of a Senate .
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Original: Coleman's career began with appearances in American sit-com's such as The Jeffersons and Good Times.
Revised: Coleman's career began with appearances in US sit-com's such as The Jeffersons and Good Times.
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Original:  Coleman who was admitted to the hospital on May 26 after falling and injuring his head.
Revised:  Coleman was admitted to the hospital on May 26 after falling and injuring his head.
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Original:  He was 42 years-old . Coleman's career began with appearances in US sit-com's such as The Jeffersons and Good Times.
Revised:  He was 42 years old . Coleman's career began with appearances in US sit-com's such as The Jeffersons and Good Times.
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Original:  He was best know for his recurring role as Arnold Jackson on Diff'rent Strokes and his recurring line, "What'choo talkin' 'bout, Willis?"
Revised:  He was best known for his recurring role as Arnold Jackson on Diff'rent Strokes and his recurring line, "What'choo talkin' 'bout, Willis?"
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Original:  He was best known for his recurring role as Arnold Jackson on Diff'rent Strokes and his recurring line, "What'choo talkin' 'bout, Willis?"  
Revised:  He was best known for his recurring role as Arnold Jackson on Diff'rent Strokes and his recurring line, "What'choo talkin' 'bout, Willis?" . 
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Original:  He was best known for his recurring role as Arnold Jackson on Diff'rent Strokes and his recurring line, "What'choo talkin' 'bout, Willis?"  
Revised:  He was best known for his recurring role as Arnold Jackson on Diff'rent Strokes and his recurring line, "What'choo talkin' 'bout, Willis?" OU
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Original: ]] US actor Gary Coleman died Friday at the Utah Valley Regional Medical Center in Provo, Utah  after complications from a brain hemorrhage.
Revised: ]] US actor Gary Coleman died Friday at the Utah Valley Regional Medical Center in Provo, Utah , after complications from a brain hemorrhage.
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Original:  Coleman had been suffering multiple medical problems throughout his life, however  it is unknown if these problems affected his death.
Revised:  Coleman had been suffering multiple medical problems throughout his life, however , it is unknown if these problems affected his death.
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Original: He set a new record of a total of 748 days in spent orbit – almost 2 years  .
Revised: He set a new record of a total of 748 days spent in orbit – almost 2 years .
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Original:  Being in space presents many health concerns – both psychological and physiological difficulties, such as bone loss adn radiation exposure.
Revised:  Being in space presents many health concerns – both psychological and physiological difficulties, such as bone loss and radiation exposure.
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Original:   "I imagine he's gotten pretty good over time in adhering to a countermeasure programme to minimize bone mass loss," says David Musson, a physician and psychology researcher at the University of Texas in Austin, US . Krikalev and Phillips are due back on 7 October 2005.
Revised:  Krikalev's longterm experience of life in space could help to shed light on what physical and mental factors will be needed for future long-duration flights – such as a manned mission to Mars. University of Texas, Austin psychology researcher David Musson is studying the phenomenon of irritability, fatigue, and lack of sleep which many space-travellers experience. He hopes to determine which mental traits will help astronauts and cosmonauts deal with or avoid these problems. He also considers Krikalev's experience important for understanding ways to counter the physical side effects of space-travel, stating that "I imagine he's gotten pretty good over time in adhering to a countermeasure programme to minimize bone mass loss," says David Musson, a physician and psychology researcher at the University of Texas in Austin, US . Krikalev and Phillips are due back on 7 October 2005.
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Original:   "I imagine he's gotten pretty good over time in adhering to a countermeasure programme to minimize bone mass loss," says David Musson, a physician and psychology researcher at the University of Texas in Austin, US . Krikalev and Phillips are due back on 7 October 2005.
Revised:  "I imagine he's gotten pretty good over time in adhering to a countermeasure programme to minimise bone mass loss," says David Musson, a physician and psychology researcher at the University of Texas in Austin, US . Krikalev and Phillips are due back on 7 October 2005.
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Original:   "I imagine he's gotten pretty good over time in adhering to a countermeasure programme to minimize bone mass loss," says David Musson, a physician and psychology researcher at the University of Texas in Austin, US . Krikalev and Phillips are due back on 7 October 2005.
Revised:  "I imagine he's gotten pretty good over time in adhering to a countermeasure programme to minimize bone mass loss," . Krikalev and Phillips are due back on 7 October 2005.
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Original:   "I imagine he's gotten pretty good over time in adhering to a countermeasure programme to minimize bone mass loss," says David Musson, a physician and psychology researcher at the University of Texas in Austin, US . Krikalev and Phillips are due back on 7 October 2005.
Revised:  "I imagine he's gotten pretty good over time in adhering to a countermeasure programme to minimize bone mass loss," says David Musson, a physician and psychology researcher at the University of Texas in Austin, US . Krikalev and Phillips are due to return to Earth on 7 October 2005.
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Original: New record time spent in space by Russian cosmonaut,  current International Space Station commander, Sergei Krikalev. Krikalev has set a new record of a total of 748 days spent in orbit – almost 2 years, as of tuesday 16th August .
Revised: New record time spent in space by Russian cosmonaut, current International Space Station commander, Krikalev has set a new record of a total of 748 days spent in orbit – almost 2 years, as of tuesday 16th August .
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Original: New record time spent in space by Russian cosmonaut,  current International Space Station commander, Sergei Krikalev. Krikalev has set a new record of a total of 748 days spent in orbit – almost 2 years, as of tuesday 16th August .
Revised: New record time spent in space by Russian cosmonaut, current International Space Station commander, Sergei Krikalev. Russian cosmonaut Sergei Krikalev has set a new record of a total of 748 days spent in orbit – almost 2 years, as of tuesday 16th August .
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Original: The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the ational Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
Revised: The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
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Original:  The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
Revised: File:Jim Calhoun and Rudy Gay.jpg|Jim Calhoun with player Rudy Gay The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
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Original:  It's a very serious matter," said Calhoun, who has been the coach for UConn for the past 28 years and won . Calhoun, 68, has already been enshrined in the College Basketball Hall of Fame and recently signed a $13 million contract extension with UConn.
Revised:  It's a very serious matter," said Calhoun, who has been the coach for UConn for the past 28 years . Calhoun, 68, has already been enshrined in the College Basketball Hall of Fame and recently signed a $13 million contract extension with UConn.
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Original: File:Jim Calhoun and Rudy Gay.jpg|Jim Calhoun with player Rudy Gay The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
Revised: Jim Calhoun with player The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
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Original: File:Jim Calhoun and Rudy Gay.jpg|Jim Calhoun with player Rudy Gay The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
Revised: File:Jim Calhoun and Rudy Gay.jpg|Jim Calhoun with player Rudy Gay The men's program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
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Original: File:Jim Calhoun and Rudy Gay.jpg|Jim Calhoun with player Rudy Gay The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
Revised: File:Jim Calhoun and Rudy Gay.jpg|Jim Calhoun with player Rudy Gay The men's basketball program of the (UConn) has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
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Original: File:Jim Calhoun and Rudy Gay.jpg|Jim Calhoun with player Rudy Gay The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
Revised: File:Jim Calhoun and Rudy Gay.jpg|Jim Calhoun with player Rudy Gay The men's basketball program of the University of Connecticut has been cited by the (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
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Original:  Calhoun, 68, has already been enshrined in the College Basketball Hall of Fame and recently signed a $13 million contract extension with UConn.
Revised:  Calhoun, 68, has already been enshrined in the and recently signed a $13 million contract extension with UConn.
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Original: Jim Calhoun with player The men's  program of the (UConn) has been cited by the (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
Revised: Jim Calhoun with player The men's basketball program of the (UConn) has been cited by the (NCAA) for eight major violations of its recruiting policy.
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Original:  The eruption has caused many casualties, among them , the death of Aníbal Archilla, NOTI7's reporter, who was one of the first reporting the event
Revised:  The eruption has caused many casualties, among them the death of Aníbal Archilla, NOTI7's reporter, who was one of the first reporting the event
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Original:  The eruption has caused many casualties, among them the death of Aníbal Archilla , NOTI7's reporter, who was one of the first reporting the event
Revised:  The eruption has caused many casualties, among them the death of Aníbal Archila , NOTI7's reporter, who was one of the first reporting the event
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Original:  The Pacaya Volcano has erupted on Friday.
Revised:  The Pacaya Volcano erupted on Friday.
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Original:  The volcano is located 50 kilometers south of the capital of Guatemala, Guatemala City.
Revised:  Itis located 50 kilometers south of the capital of Guatemala, Guatemala City.
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Original:  Throughout the evening and night, volcanic ash has fallen in the municipalities of Amatitlán, Villa Nueva, and Guatemala City.
Revised:  Throughout the evening and night, volcanic ash fell in the municipalities of Amatitlán, Villa Nueva, and Guatemala City.
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Original:  The eruption has caused many casualties, among them the death of Aníbal Archila, NOTI7's reporter, who was one of the first reporting the event  
Revised:  The eruption has caused many casualties, among them the death of Aníbal Archila, NOTI7's reporter, who was one of the first reporting the event . 
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Original:  This has started in May, and is expected to continue until the spill has been fully contained, or no longer needed.
Revised:  This started in May, and is expected to continue until the spill has been fully contained, or no longer needed.
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Original:  While the risk of the oil slick moving up the seaboard far enough to get into Canada is slim , it is possible.
Revised:  While the risk is slim that the oil slick moving up the seaboard far enough to get into Canada is slim , it is possible.
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Original:  While the risk of the oil slick moving up the seaboard far enough to get into Canada is slim , it is possible.
Revised:  While the risk of the oil slick will move up the seaboard far enough to get into Canada is slim , it is possible.
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Original:  While the risk of the oil slick moving up the seaboard far enough to get into Canada is slim , it is possible.
Revised:  While the risk of the oil slick moving up the seaboard enough to get into Canada is slim , it is possible.
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Original:  While the risk of the oil slick moving up the seaboard far enough to get into Canada is slim , it is possible.
Revised:  While the risk of the oil slick moving up the seaboard far enough to get into Canadian waters , it is possible.
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Original:  "If oil is swept up into the Loop Current—which moves at about 3.3 to 6.5 feet (one to two meters) a second—there's essentially no way to stop it," Tony Sturges, professor emeritus in oceanography at Florida State University, told National Geographic.
Revised:  "If oil is swept up into the Loop Current—which moves at about 3.3 to 6.5 feet (one to two meters) a second—there's essentially no way to stop it," Tony Sturges, professor emeritus of oceanography at Florida State University, told National Geographic.
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Original:  "Once [oil] gets into the loop current, you can bet the farm it will go around to the south" This spill could devastate the fishing industry of Canada, and harm any potential tourism in the beautiful coastal waters of Eastern Canada.
Revised:  "Once [oil] gets into the loop current, you can bet the farm it will go around to the south" This spill could devastate the fishing industry of Canada, and harm any potential tourism on the beautiful coastal waters of Eastern Canada.
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Original:  So while Canada is offering its hand to the United States as a gesture of assistance, it serves dually as a self assurance that Canada will not be affected by the spill, and to stop it before it reaches the border if it does get picked up by the currents . Galler
Revised:  So while Canada is offering its hand to the United States as a gesture of assistance, it serves dually as a self assurance that Canada will not be affected by the spill, and to stop it before it reaches the border if it does get picked up by the currents Galler
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Original:  So while Canada is offering its hand to the United States as a gesture of assistance, it serves dually as a self assurance that Canada will not be affected by the spill, and to stop it before it reaches the border if it does get picked up by the currents . Galler
Revised:  So while Canada is offering its hand to the United States as a gesture of assistance, it serves dually as a self assurance that Canada will not be affected by the spill, and to stop it before it reaches the border if it does get picked up by the currents . 
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Original:  Currently the spill is being held within the Gulf of Mexico, however, as the spill grows exponentially each day it is at bigger risk of being picked up by the Loop Current.
Revised:  Currently the spill is being held within the Gulf of Mexico, however, as the spill grows each day it is at bigger risk of being picked up by the Loop Current.
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Original:  Shortly afterwards, Justice John Paul Stevens rejected the motion  
Revised:  Shortly afterwards, Justice John Paul Stevens rejected the motion . 
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Original: CNN is reporting on a brand  new computer virus, specifically the worm rbot.cbq , as potentionally one of the worst in a long time.
Revised: CNN is reporting on a brand new computer virus, a worm dubbed rbot.cbq , as potentionally one of the worst in a long time.
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Original:   Chris Carboni of the Internet Storm Center speculates that "The fact that CNN, ABC and the NYTimes got it may be as simple as reporters from these organizations visiting the same event and connecting to an infected network.
Revised:  Chris Carboni of the Internet Storm Center speculated that "The fact that CNN, ABC and the NYTimes got it may be as simple as reporters from these organizations visiting the same event and connecting to an infected network.
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Original: Cable news giant sees global threat when fast-spreading worm cripples its PCs, but was the danger overstated in a rush to judgement?
Revised: Cable news giant sees global threat when worm cripples its PCs, but was the danger overstated in a rush to judgement?
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Original:  The reporting suggested that it had the potential to become one of the most virulent and costly yet seen.
Revised:  Its reporting suggested that it had the potential to become one of the most virulent and costly yet seen.
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Original:  Media orginizations ABC and the New York times were affected as well.
Revised:  Media organizations ABC and the New York times were affected as well.
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Original:  Perhaps this gave the studio more insight through its own experience of the virus , as well as providing an early lead .
Revised:  Perhaps first-hand experience gave the studio more insight through its own experience of the virus , as well as providing an early lead .
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Original:  Perhaps this gave the studio more insight through its own experience of the virus , as well as providing an early lead .
Revised:  Perhaps this gave the studio more insight on the virus while providing an early lead .
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