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Original:  The storm, now officially Tropical Storm Dolores, is the fourth named storm of the 2009 Pacific hurricane season.
Revised:  The storm, now officially Tropical Storm Dolores, is the fourth named tropical cyclone of the 2009 Pacific hurricane season.
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Original:  In a recent statement from the organization, forecasters noted that "There is a short window available for any further intensification", but the storm is likely to weaken once it moves over cooler waters  
Revised:  In a recent statement from the organization, forecasters noted that "There is a short window available for any further intensification", but the storm is likely to weaken once it moves over cooler waters . 
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Original:  In a recent statement from the organization, forecasters noted that "There is a short window available for any further intensification", but the storm is likely to weaken once it moves over cooler waters . Related new
Revised:  In a recent statement from the organization, forecasters noted that "There is a short window available for any further intensification", but the storm is likely to weaken once it moves over cooler waters Related new
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Original:  In a recent statement from the organization, forecasters noted that "There is a short window available for any further intensification", but the storm is likely to weaken once it moves over cooler waters . Related new
Revised:  In a recent statement from the organization, forecasters noted that "There is a short window available for any further intensification", but the storm is likely to weaken once it moves over cooler waters . 
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Original:  This has caused many to abandon them [[ [[  , re-registering as independents or joining third parties.
Revised:  This has caused many to abandon them [[ [[ , re-registering as independent or joining third parties.
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Original: Recently 36\% of Americans say they are independents, 35\% identify as Democrats, while the remaining 23\% see themselves as Republicans.
Revised: Recently 36\% of Americans say they are independents, 35\% identify as Democrats, while 23\% see themselves as Republicans.
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Original: One of these third parties are the Modern Whigs Party (MWP), who have enjoyed phenomenal growth over the past year;
Revised: One of these third parties are the Modern Whig Party (MWP), who have enjoyed phenomenal growth over the past year;
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Original:  With a centrist platform, the Party's commitment to "fiscal responsibility" and "bold social progression" has attracted several conservative Democrats and centrist Republicans to it.
Revised:  With the Party's commitment to "fiscal responsibility" and "bold social progression" has attracted several conservative Democrats and centrist Republicans to it.
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Original:  With a centrist platform, the Party's commitment to "fiscal responsibility" and "bold social progression" has attracted several conservative Democrats and centrist Republicans to it.
Revised:  With a centrist platform, the Party's commitment to "fiscal responsibility" and "bold social progression" , several conservative Democrats and centrist Republicans to it.
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Original:  With the Party's commitment to "fiscal responsibility" and "bold social progression", several conservative Democrats and centrist Republicans  to it.
Revised:  With the Party's commitment to "fiscal responsibility" and "bold social progression", several conservative Democrats and centrist Republicans have been attracted to it.
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Original:  No one has been killed , but luckily minor injuries have been reported.
Revised:  No one has been killed and injuries have been reported.
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Original: Tanker explosion on I-75 north of Detroit A tanker explosion on I-75/Chrysler Freeway, has destroyed a part of the Nine Mile Rd. overpass, in Hazel Park, MI, a northern suburb of Detroit.
Revised:  A tanker explosion on I-75/Chrysler Freeway, has destroyed a part of the Nine Mile Rd. overpass, in Hazel Park, MI, a northern suburb of Detroit.
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Original:  One man, truck driver Ronald Martinez  has been killed and  injuries have been reported.
Revised:  One man, truck driver Ronald Martinez . has been killed and injuries have been reported.
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Original: A tanker explosion on I-75/Chrysler Freeway , has destroyed a part of the Nine Mile Rd. overpass, in Hazel Park, Michigan (MI) , a northern suburb of Detroit.
Revised: A tanker explosion on Interstate 75 , has destroyed a part of the Nine Mile Rd. overpass, in Hazel Park, Michigan (MI) , a northern suburb of Detroit.
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Original:  This will be devastating for commuters who travel one of the most used freeways in the metro area.
Revised:  This is expected to cause trouble for commuters who travel one of the most used freeways in the metro area.
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Original:  About 2,000 residents of Hazel Park are now without power due to the accident .
Revised:  About 2,000 residents of Hazel Park are now without power due to the accident 
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Original:  File:Oakland County Michigan Incorporated and Unincorporated areas Hazel Park highlighted.svg|Hazel Park, Michigan (MI), United State
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Original: The largest skyscraper in Chicago, Illinois, also the largest skyscraper in the whole w:United States officially received a new name change on July 16, 2009. w:Willis Group Holdings, which in a landmark deal, became the primary tenants of the building in March, 2009.
Revised: On July 16, 2009, the largest skyscraper in the whole w:United States officially received a new name change on July 16, 2009. w:Willis Group Holdings, which in a landmark deal, became the primary tenants of the building in March, 2009.
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Original: The largest skyscraper in Chicago, Illinois, also the largest skyscraper in the whole w:United States officially received a new name change on July 16, 2009. w:Willis Group Holdings, which in a landmark deal, became the primary tenants of the building in March, 2009.
Revised: The largest skyscraper in Chicago, Illinois, also the largest skyscraper in Chicago, Illinois was officially renamed Willis Tower. Willis Group Holdings became a major tenant of the building in March, 2009.
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Original:  As part of the deal , they were given the w:naming rights to the tower, which had been known as the w: Sears Tower since its opening in 1973    
Revised:  As part of the deal , they were given the w:naming rights to the tower, which had been known as the Sears Tower since its opening in 1973 
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Original:  As part of the deal whereby they agreed to lease 140,000 square feet of the building, they were given the w: naming rights to the tower, which had been known as the Sears Tower since its opening in 1973.
Revised:  As part of the deal whereby they agreed to lease 140,000 square feet of the building, they were given the naming rights to the tower, which had been known as the Sears Tower since its opening in 1973.
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Original:  Several local residents have expressed their displeasure in the renaming, including one who started the website " www.itsthesearstower.com " . Chicago Historical Society senior curator John Russick has stated of the name change, "The Sears Tower has been an icon here for the last quarter of a century.
Revised:  Several local residents have expressed their displeasure in the renaming, including one who started the website www.itsthesearstower.com " . Chicago Historical Society senior curator John Russick has stated of the name change, "The Sears Tower has been an icon here for the last quarter of a century.
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Original:  Several local residents have expressed their displeasure in the renaming, including one who started the website " www.itsthesearstower.com " . Chicago Historical Society senior curator John Russick has stated of the name change, "The Sears Tower has been an icon here for the last quarter of a century.
Revised:  Several local residents have expressed their displeasure in the renaming, including one who started the website " www.itsthesearstower.com . Chicago Historical Society senior curator John Russick has stated of the name change, "The Sears Tower has been an icon here for the last quarter of a century.
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Original:  " Though lettering on the building had been changed on July 15, the official change did not occur until July 16, during a private ceremony involving 500 Willis employees and invited guests.
Revised:  Though lettering on the building had been changed on July 15, the official change did not occur until July 16, during a private ceremony involving 500 Willis employees and invited guests.
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Original: ]] Space shuttle Endeavour has launched on a mission to finish construction of a new science lab at the International Space Station.
Revised: ]] Space Shuttle Endeavour has launched on a mission to finish construction of a new science lab at the International Space Station.
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Original:  The seven astronauts aboard Endeavour began their journey Wednesday evening to deliver the third and final segment of the Japanese Kibo science laboratory.
Revised:  The seven astronauts aboard Endeavour began their journey Wednesday evening to deliver the third and final segment of the Japanese Kibō science laboratory.
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Original:  Booster ignition and liftoff of Endeavour, completing Kibo and fulfilling Japan's hope for an out-of-this-world space laboratory," he said.
Revised:  Booster ignition and liftoff of Endeavour, completing Kibō and fulfilling Japan's hope for an out-of-this-world space laboratory," he said.
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Original:  The Endeavour was supposed to launch last month, but a hydrogen leak forced officials to postpone while technicians fixed the problem.
Revised:  The Endeavour was supposed to have launched last month, but a hydrogen leak forced officials to postpone while technicians fixed the problem.
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Original:  The Endeavour crew will spend nearly two weeks at the station to install the Kibo lab and perform other maintenance tasks, such as swapping out batteries in the station.
Revised:  The Endeavour crew will spend nearly two weeks at the station to install the Kibō lab and perform other maintenance tasks, such as swapping out batteries in the station.
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Original:  The Kibo module will expand work space on the station and allow astronauts to conduct experiments that involve exposing materials to the vacuum of space.
Revised:  The Kibō module will expand work space on the station and allow astronauts to conduct experiments that involve exposing materials to the vacuum of space.
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Original: ]] Space Shuttle Endeavour has launched on a mission to finish construction of a new science lab at the International Space Station .
Revised: ]] Space Shuttle Endeavour launched on a mission to finish construction of a new science lab at the International Space Station .
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Original: Paul Winchell won a grammy in 1974 for best children's recording for his work on "The Most Wonderful Thing about Tiggers" in the animated Disney film Winnie the Pooh and Tigger Too.
Revised: Paul Winchell won a Grammy Award in 1974 for best children's recording for his work on "The Most Wonderful Thing about Tiggers" in the animated Disney film Winnie the Pooh and Tigger Too.
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Original: Paul Winchell won a grammy in 1974 for best children's recording for his work on "The Most Wonderful Thing about Tiggers" in the animated Disney film Winnie the Pooh and Tigger Too.
Revised: Paul Winchell won a grammy in 1974 for Best Recording For Children for his work on "The Most Wonderful Thing about Tiggers" in the animated Disney film Winnie the Pooh and Tigger Too.
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Original: Paul Winchell won a Grammy Award in 1974 for Best Recording For Children  for his work on "The Most Wonderful Thing about Tiggers" in the animated Disney film Winnie the Pooh and Tigger Too.
Revised: Paul Winchell won a Grammy Award in 1974 in the Best Recording For Children for his work on "The Most Wonderful Thing about Tiggers" in the animated Disney film Winnie the Pooh and Tigger Too.
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Original:   Winchell, in addition to being a prolific voice artist, patented more than 30 inventions including an artificial heart, a flameless cigarette lighter, and a disposable razor.
Revised:  <p> Winchell, in addition to being a prolific voice artist, patented more than 30 inventions including an artificial heart, a flameless cigarette lighter, and a disposable razor.
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Original:   Paul Winchell won a Grammy Award in 1974 in the Best Recording For Children category for his work on "The Most Wonderful Thing about Tiggers" in the animated Disney film Winnie the Pooh and Tigger Too.
Revised:  <p> Paul Winchell won a Grammy Award in 1974 in the Best Recording For Children category for his work on "The Most Wonderful Thing about Tiggers" in the animated Disney film Winnie the Pooh and Tigger Too.
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Original: An additional, unexploded, bomb was later found and defused at the Marriot .
Revised: An additional, unexploded, bomb was later found and defused at the Marriot 
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Original:  File:Indonesia 2002 CIA map.jpg|Jakarta, capital and largest city of Indonesi
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Original:  ]] The explosions are at two luxury hotels, the Marriott and Ritz-Carlton, popular with foreign businessmen in the business district and are reported to have occurred in the hotel restaurants during breakfast.
Revised:  ]] The explosions were at two luxury hotels, the Marriott and Ritz-Carlton, popular with foreign businessmen in the business district and are reported to have occurred in the hotel restaurants during breakfast.
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Original:  The police have declared this event to be unrelated to the other explosions, stating it was simply a car accident that lead to a tire burst and engine short circuit .
Revised:  The police have declared this event to be unrelated to the other explosions, stating it was simply a car accident that lead to a tire burst and engine short circuit 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An additional, unexploded, bomb was later found and defused at the Marriot
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Original: An additional , unexploded bomb was later found and defused at the Marriott.
Revised: An additional unexploded bomb was later found and defused at the Marriott.
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Original:  The police have declared this event to be unrelated to the other explosions, stating it was simply a car accident that lead to a tire burst and engine short circuit  
Revised:  The police have declared this event to be unrelated to the other explosions, stating it was simply a car accident that lead to a tire burst and engine short circuit . 
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Original:  The police have declared this event to be unrelated to the other explosions, stating it was simply a car accident that lead to a tire burst and engine short circuit  
Revised:  The police have declared this event to be unrelated to the other explosions, stating it was simply a car accident that lead to a tire burst and engine short circuit Sister lin
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Original:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airwothiness Directive (AD ) would apply (to Monday's incident).
Revised:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airwothiness Directive AD ) would apply (to Monday's incident).
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Original:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that ( Airwothiness Directive [AD]) would apply (to Monday's incident).
Revised:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that ( Airworthiness Directive [AD]) would apply (to Monday's incident).
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Original:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airworthiness Directive AD )would apply ( to Monday's incident ) . We are going to look at the maintenance records and the maintenance practices, and we are going to want to know if all of these (ADs) were followed."
Revised:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airworthiness Directive )would apply ( to Monday's incident ) . We are going to look at the maintenance records and the maintenance practices, and we are going to want to know if all of these (ADs) were followed."
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Original:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airworthiness Directive AD )would apply ( to Monday's incident ) . We are going to look at the maintenance records and the maintenance practices, and we are going to want to know if all of these (ADs) were followed."
Revised:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airworthiness Directive AD (AD)) would apply to Monday's incident ) . We are going to look at the maintenance records and the maintenance practices, and we are going to want to know if all of these (ADs) were followed."
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Original:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airworthiness Directive AD )would apply ( to Monday's incident ) . We are going to look at the maintenance records and the maintenance practices, and we are going to want to know if all of these (ADs) were followed."
Revised:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airworthiness Directive AD )would apply ( to Monday's incident . We are going to look at the maintenance records and the maintenance practices, and we are going to want to know if all of these (ADs) were followed."
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Original: The damaged section  Investigators with the United States National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) are examining a damaged section removed from a Southwest Airlines Boeing 737-300 that blew out in-flight on Monday, July 13.
Revised: The damaged section . Investigators with the United States National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) are examining a damaged section removed from a Southwest Airlines Boeing 737-300 that blew out in-flight on Monday, July 13.
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Original:  The passenger jet was flying between Nashville and Baltimore when the hole, which measured seventeen inches by eight, opened up in the jet's roof.
Revised:  The passenger jet was flying between Nashville , Tennessee and Baltimore, Maryland when the hole, which measured seventeen inches by eight, opened up in the jet's roof.
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Original:  A safe emergency landing was performed and the 126 passengers exited without injury.
Revised:  A safe emergency landing was performed and the 126 passengers were evacuated from the aircraft without injury.
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Original:  The damaged section arrived in Washington  yesterday for examination by the NTSB.
Revised:  The damaged section arrived in Washington , D.C. yesterday for examination by the NTSB.
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Original:  In the light of Monday's incident, former NTSB member and maintenance specialist John Goglia criticised the airline's maintenance practises and governmental oversight.
Revised:  In the light of Monday's incident, former NTSB member and maintenance specialist John Goglia criticized the airline's maintenance practises and governmental oversight.
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Original:  In the light of Monday's incident, former NTSB member and maintenance specialist John Goglia criticised the airline's maintenance practises and governmental oversight.
Revised:  In the light of Monday's incident, former NTSB member and maintenance specialist John Goglia criticised the airline's maintenance practices and governmental oversight.
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Original:  The inner side of the same section Southwest, however, released a statement the day after the mishap in defence of their maintenance.
Revised:  The inner side of the same section . Southwest released a statement the day after the mishap in defence of their maintenance.
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Original:  The inner side of the same section Southwest, however, released a statement the day after the mishap in defence of their maintenance.
Revised:  The inner side of the same section Southwest, however, released a statement the day after the mishap in defense of their maintenance.
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Original:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airworthiness Directive (AD) ) would apply [to Monday's incident].
Revised:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that (Airworthiness Directive (AD) would apply [to Monday's incident].
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Original:  However, the FAA said that the inspections did not apply to the section that failed and, in any event, Boeing and Southwest had come up with an improved design that was up to standard
Revised:  However, the FAA said that the inspections did not apply to the section that failed and, in any event, Boeing and Southwest ultimately came up with an improved design that was up to standard
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Original:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that ( Airworthiness Directive (AD) would apply [to Monday's incident].
Revised:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that Airworthiness Directive (AD) would apply [to Monday's incident].
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Original: There inspections Southwest failed to perform in 2008 concerned examining the top of their aircraft for structural damage after it was discovered a weight reducing modification  could reduce the strength of the design.
Revised: The inspections Southwest failed to perform in 2008 concerned examining the top of their aircraft for structural damage after it was discovered a weight reducing modification could reduce the strength of the design.
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Original: There inspections Southwest failed to perform in 2008 concerned examining the top of their aircraft for structural damage after it was discovered a weight reducing modification  could reduce the strength of the design.
Revised: There inspections Southwest failed to perform in 2008 concerned examining the top of their aircraft for structural damage after a weight reducing modification could reduce the strength of the design.
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Original:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that  Airworthiness Directive (AD  ) would apply [to Monday's incident].
Revised:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that ( Airworthiness Directive (AD ) would apply [to Monday's incident].
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Original:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that  Airworthiness Directive (AD  ) would apply [to Monday's incident].
Revised:  NTSB spokesman Peter Knudson said that "It looks like that Airworthiness Directive (AD ) ) would apply [to Monday's incident].
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Original: Walter Cronkite in 2006 Walter Cronkite , the American newscaster who was a household name in television journalism, has died at the age of 92, according to media reports.
Revised: Walter Cronkite , the American newscaster who was a household name in television journalism, has died at the age of 92, according to media reports.
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Original:  His customary signoff, "and that's the way it is...", ended most broadcasts and his addition of "day..." counting up the days of the Iranian hostage crisis inspired a similar practice on Countdown with Keith Olbermann.
Revised:  He will be remembered by some for his customary signoff, "and that's the way it is...", ended most broadcasts and his addition of "day..." counting up the days of the Iranian hostage crisis inspired a similar practice on Countdown with Keith Olbermann.
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