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Original:  __NOTOC__ Hsiao-wen Hung: Information security isn't built within a day . [[Image:WS2008 VS2008 Launch in Taiwan Hsiao-wen Hung.jpg|Hsiao-wen Hung: The information security industry isn't built within a simple solution.
Revised:  __NOTOC__ Hsiao-wen Hung: Information security isn't built in a day [[Image:WS2008 VS2008 Launch in Taiwan Hsiao-wen Hung.jpg|Hsiao-wen Hung: The information security industry isn't built within a simple solution.
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Original:  The improvements of information technology firmly brought on  opportunities, but information security is particularly respected by companies from security industry, As of this , how about the information security?
Revised:  opportunities, but information security is particularly respected by companies from security industry, As of this , how about the information security?
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Original:  The improvements of information technology firmly brought on  opportunities, but information security is particularly respected by companies from security industry, As of this , how about the information security?
Revised:  The improvements of information technology firmly brought on opportunities, but information security is of particular concern to companies in the security industry. Since this is so, what is the state of information security?
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Original:  Hung: Safety and flexibility , its relation is like a paddle .
Revised:  Hung: Safety and flexibility are like a paddle .
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Original:  If something wanted to be linkable anywhere, there were still some considerations on security .
Revised:  If something wanted to be linkable anywhere, there are security considerations .
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Original:  It's like a house which anyone can enter in it .
Revised:  It's like a house which anyone can enter .
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Original:  If you want to ensure its safety on your house, you should doseveral hard works .
Revised:  If you want to ensure the security of your building, there are some difficult things you need to do .
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Original:  That's why the security is a must-have trend in reality.
Revised:  That's why security is really a must-have trend in reality.
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Original:  Hung: Even though it's safe to lock everything all, but it is inconvenience to lock (them all) .
Revised:  Hung: Even though it's secure to lock everything all, but it is inconvenience to lock (them all) .
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Original:  Hung: Even though it's safe to lock everything all, but it is inconvenience to lock (them all) .
Revised:  Hung: Even though it's safe to lock everything down, it is inconvenient .
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Original:  Therefore, some key elements like encryption, password authentication, policy, and some Web 2.0 solutions played key roles in information security.
Revised:  Therefore, some key elements like encryption, password authentication, policy, and some Web 2.0 solutions have a key role to play in information security.
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Original:  There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet , if anyone want to prevent them, a complete planning should do priory .
Revised:  There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet . If anyone wants to prevent them, a complete planning should do priory .
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Original:  There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet , if anyone want to prevent them, a complete planning should do priory .
Revised:  There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet , if anyone want to prevent them, complete planning should do priory .
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Original:  There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet , if anyone want to prevent them, a complete planning should do priory .
Revised:  There were some involuntary and deliberate attackers on the Internet , if anyone want to prevent them, a complete planning should be a priority .
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Original:  That's why the information security industry is built with several solutions and long-term experiences but not a simple solution in a day.
Revised:  That's why the information security industry is built with several solutions and long-term experiences , not a simple solution in a day.
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Original:  Li Chang: Convergences will be brought for security and IT industries . [[Image:2008Computex Pre-Show Press Conference Li Chang.jpg|Li Chang: Convergences will be brought for security and IT industries besides of changes on WiMAX. (Interview audio clip)]]
Revised:  Li Chang: Convergences will be brought for security and IT industries [[Image:2008Computex Pre-Show Press Conference Li Chang.jpg|Li Chang: Convergences will be brought for security and IT industries besides of changes on WiMAX. (Interview audio clip)]]
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Original:  What's your opinion on several disputes from IS companies during the "2008 Asia-pacific Information Security Forum"?
Revised:  What's your opinion on issues raised by IS companies during the "2008 Asia-pacific Information Security Forum"?
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Original:  When a new technology was under development, companies mostly looked on its vision rather than its hidden factors like information or data security.
Revised:  When a new technology was under development, companies mostly looked at its possibilities, rather than hidden factors like information or data security.
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Original:  As the Internet just began in a mature infrastructure, the public might not know its critical issue on security factor.
Revised:  As the Internet just begins to be a mature infrastructure, the public might not know its critical issue on security factor.
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Original:  As of WiMAX which you mentioned, even though it's under development, but you will not imagine what it will happen in the future.
Revised:  As of WiMAX which you mentioned, even though it's under development, you cannot imagine what will happen in the future.
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Original:  However, there is currently a movement in Romania to give the Aromanians a status as a separate ethnic group, therefore entitling them to parliamentary representation and education in the Aromanian language, among other rights .
Revised:  However, there is currently a movement in Romania to give the Aromanians a status as a separate ethnic group, therefore entitling them to parliamentary representation and education in the Aromanian language, among other rights 
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Original:  It's not an environment conducive to child development . " 
Revised:  It's not an environment conducive to child development , " 
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Original:  It's not an environment conducive to child development . " 
Revised:  It's not an environment conducive to child development . " he said.
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Original:  Mr Howard has been a staunch supporter of hardline immigration and asylum policies since the mid 80's
Revised:  "Mandatory detention is not a matter of conscience. It is a Government policy," Mr Howard was quoted as saying. Howard has been a staunch supporter of hardline immigration and asylum policies since the mid 80's
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Original: A Malaysian woman and her three year old daughter were released from Villawood Detention Centre on bridging visas yesterday after media coverage in Australian and Malaysia.
Revised: A Malaysian woman and her three year old daughter were released from Villawood Detention Centre on bridging visas yesterday after media coverage in Australia and Malaysia.
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Original:  Howard has been a staunch supporter of hardline immigration and asylum policies since the mid 80's  
Revised:  Howard has been a staunch supporter of hardline immigration and asylum policies since the mid 80's . 
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Original:  The city's Department of Buildings lifted an order to cease work imposed at the time as the buiding's owners have installed fire control systems at the condemned 26 storey office block   
Revised:  The city's Department of Buildings lifted an order to cease work imposed at the time as the buiding's owners have installed fire control systems at the condemned 26 storey office block . 
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Original: Thick smoke rises from the building during the August 18th fire Demolition work is set to resume at the former Deutsche Bamk Building in New York after work was halted last August over a fire that killed two firefighters.
Revised: Thick smoke rises from the building during the August 18th fire Demolition work is set to resume at the former Deutsche Bank Building in New York after work was halted last August over a fire that killed two firefighters.
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Original: After the fire, work immediatly halted and a grand jury crimminal investigation followed.
Revised: After the fire, work immediatly halted and a grand jury criminal investigation followed.
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Original:  Travers says of Lucas' knack of " turning flesh-and-blood actors into cardboard cutouts."
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Original:  According to William Arnold of the Seattle Post-Intelligencer, James Berardinelli of ReelViews, and Claudia Puig of USA Today all agree that Episode III is arguably the best of the Star Wars series, however, Peter Travers of Rolling Stone begs to differ.
Revised:  According to William Arnold of the Seattle Post-Intelligencer, James Berardinelli of ReelViews, and Claudia Puig of USA Today , Episode III is arguably the best of the Star Wars series, however, Peter Travers of Rolling Stone begs to differ.
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Original: In its opening weekend, Revenge of the Sith racked up a total, counting from Thursday, May 19 to Sunday, May 22, USD $158,449,700 in the domestic United States box office, $145,500,000 internationally, and a total of $303,949,700 worldwide.
Revised: In its opening weekend, Revenge of the Sith earned a total, counting from Thursday, May 19 to Sunday, May 22, USD $158,449,700 in the domestic United States box office, $145,500,000 internationally, and a total of $303,949,700 worldwide.
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Original: George Lucas' final installment of the prequel Star Wars trilogy, Revenge of the Sith, landed in theaters around the world on May 19 after receiving relatively positive reviews and eager fans.
Revised: George Lucas' final installment of the prequel Star Wars trilogy, Revenge of the Sith, landed in theaters around the world on May 19.
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Original:  Travers furthers that Lucas' ability to turn  "flesh-and-blood actors into cardboard cutouts  " makes Lucas' movie unworthy of its herald title of best yet.
Revised:  Travers states that Lucas' ability to turn "flesh-and-blood actors into cardboard cutouts " makes Lucas' movie unworthy of its herald title of best yet.
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Original:  Travers furthers that Lucas' ability to turn  "flesh-and-blood actors into cardboard cutouts  " makes Lucas' movie unworthy of its herald title of best yet.
Revised:  Travers furthers that Lucas' ability to turn , "flesh-and-blood actors into cardboard cutouts " makes Lucas' movie unworthy of its herald title of best yet.
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Original:  Travers furthers that Lucas' ability to turn  "flesh-and-blood actors into cardboard cutouts  " makes Lucas' movie unworthy of its herald title of best yet.
Revised:  Travers furthers that Lucas' ability to turn "flesh-and-blood actors into cardboard cutouts , " makes Lucas' movie unworthy of its herald title of best yet.
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Original:  In its opening weekend, Revenge of the Sith earned a total, counting from Thursday, May 19 to Sunday, May 22, USD $158,449,700 in the domestic United States box office, $145,500,000 internationally, and a total of $303,949,700 worldwide.
Revised:  In its opening weekend, Revenge of the Sith earned a total, counting from Thursday, May 19 to Sunday, May 22, USD $158,449,700 in the domestic United States box office, $145,500,000 internationally, for a total of $303,949,700 worldwide.
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Original:  According to William Arnold of the Seattle Post-Intelligencer, James Berardinelli of ReelViews, and Claudia Puig of USA Today, Episode III is arguably the best of the Star Wars series , however , Peter Travers of Rolling Stone begs to differ.
Revised:  According to William Arnold of the Seattle Post-Intelligencer, and Claudia Puig of USA Today, Episode III is arguably the best of the Star Wars series , however , Peter Travers of Rolling Stone begs to differ.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  According to William Arnold of the Seattle Post-Intelligencer, James Berardinelli of ReelViews, and Claudia Puig of USA Today, Episode III is arguably the best of the Star Wars series , however , Peter Travers of Rolling Stone begs to differ.
Revised:  According to William Arnold of the Seattle Post-Intelligencer, James Berardinelli of ReelViews, and Claudia Puig of USA Today, Episode III may be the best of the Star Wars series , however , Peter Travers of Rolling Stone begs to differ.
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Original: President Raúl Castro, who succeeded his brother Fidel | in February, has made agriculture one of the top priorities for Cuba.
Revised: President Raúl Castro, who succeeded his brother Fidel in February, has made agriculture one of the top priorities for Cuba.
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Original:  At a meeting with Communist Party leaders earlier this week, Raúl called food production "a matter of maximum national security ".
Revised:  At a meeting with Communist Party leaders earlier this week, Raúl called food production "a matter of maximum national security ."
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Original: Odense Squash Club (OSC) wins the Danish club championship in Squash for teams.
Revised: Odense Squash Club (OSC) won the Danish team club championship in Squash for teams.
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Original:  The final was however dominated by OSC, and Herlev wasn ‘ t ever in the match.
Revised:  The final was however dominated by OSC, and Herlev wasn ' t ever in the match.
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Original:  OSC ’ s players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.
Revised:  OSC ' s players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.
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Original:  OSC wins the Danish championship 6-1 in the final at Squash Center Danmark in Odense . Category:Europe Category:Denmark Category:Odense Category:Spor
Revised:  OSC wins the Danish championship 6-1 in the final at Squash Center Danmark in Odense Category:Europe Category:Denmark Category:Odense Category:Spor
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Original:  OSC wins the Danish championship 6-1 in the final at Squash Center Danmark in Odense . Category:Europe Category:Denmark Category:Odense Category:Spor
Revised:  OSC wins the Danish championship 6-1 in the final at Squash Center Danmark in Odense . 
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Original:  Odense Squash Club (OSC) won the Danish team club championship in squash.
Revised: The Odense Squash Club (OSC) won the Danish team club championship in squash.
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Original:  OSC was favourite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick  opponent in the first semifinal .
Revised:  OSC was the favorite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick opponent in the first semifinal .
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Original:  OSC was favourite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick  opponent in the first semifinal .
Revised:  OSC was favourite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick their opponent in the first semifinal .
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Original:  OSC was favourite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick  opponent in the first semifinal .
Revised:  OSC was favourite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick opponent in the first semi-final .
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Original:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) in the first semi final , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favourites professionals from KSK , run in to serious problems,  injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi .
Revised:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favourites professionals from KSK , run in to serious problems, injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi .
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Original:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) in the first semi final , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favourites professionals from KSK , run in to serious problems,  injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi .
Revised:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) in the first semi final , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favorited professionals from KSK , run in to serious problems, injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi .
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Original:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) in the first semi final , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favourites professionals from KSK , run in to serious problems,  injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi .
Revised:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) in the first semi final , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favourites professionals from KSK ran in to serious problems, injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi .
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Original:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) in the first semi final , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favourites professionals from KSK , run in to serious problems,  injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi .
Revised:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) in the first semi final , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favourites professionals from KSK , run in to serious problems, as injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi .
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Original:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) in the first semi final , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favourites professionals from KSK , run in to serious problems,  injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi .
Revised:  OSC chose to play Åbyhøj Squash Klub(ÅSK) in the first semi final , and beat them with ease 6-1, only loosing the 2.lady to Ditte Nielsen(Åsk) While in the other semi, the favourites professionals from KSK , run in to serious problems, injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance .
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Original:  After 5 matches and down by two matches Mikkel Kragholm (Herlev) and Thomas Pilak (Herlev) became double match winners when they each beat their opponent by 3-0 and 3-1, winning the match 4-3 for Herlev.
Revised:  After 5 matches and down by two matches Mikkel Kragholm (Herlev) and Thomas Pilak (Herlev) became double match winners when they each beat their opponents by 3-0 and 3-1, winning the match 4-3 for Herlev.
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Original:  The final was however dominated by OSC, and Herlev wasn't ever in the match.
Revised:  The final was dominated by OSC, and Herlev wasn't ever in the match.
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Original:  Only  Danish individual champion Morten Sørensen was able to win for Herlev.
Revised:  Only the Danish individual champion Morten Sørensen was able to win for Herlev.
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Original:  Rest of the matches was lost for Herlev . OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.
Revised:  Herlev lost the rest of the matches was lost for Herlev . OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.
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Original:  Rest of the matches was lost for Herlev . OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.
Revised:  Rest of the matches . OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.
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Original:  Rest of the matches was lost for Herlev . OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.
Revised:  Rest of the matches was lost for Herlev . OSC's players proved to be too strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.
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Original:  Rest of the matches was lost for Herlev . OSC's players proved to be to strong for last years bronze winners from Herlev.
Revised:  Rest of the matches was lost for Herlev . OSC's players proved to be to strong for last year's bronze winners from Herlev.
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Original:  OSC wins the Danish championship 6-1 in the final at Squash Center Danmark in Odense
Revised:  OSC won the Danish championship 6-1 in the final at Squash Center Danmark in Odense
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Original: The Odense Squash Club (OSC) won the Danish team club championship in squash.
Revised:  Odense Squash Club (OSC) won the Danish team club championship in squash.
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Original:  OSC was the favorite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick their opponent in the first semi-final .
Revised:  OSC was the favourite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick their opponent in the first semi-final .
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Original:  OSC was the favorite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick their opponent in the first semi-final .
Revised:  OSC was the favorite to take the gold this weekend, as they had already won league play with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick their opponent in the first semi-final .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  OSC was the favorite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead down to København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick their opponent in the first semi-final .
Revised:  OSC was the favorite to take the gold this weekend, they won the league with a comfortable lead over København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore were playing at home and able to pick their opponent in the first semi-final .
Edit intent: clarity