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Original: An express train has struck a collapsed motorway bridge in the Czech Republic, leaving ten people dead and 100 injured.
Revised: An express train struck a collapsed motorway bridge in the Czech Republic, leaving ten people dead and 100 injured.
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Original:  The EuroCity train from Krakow in Poland to Prague derailed after the collision at 140km/h (87mph).
Revised:  The EuroCity train , which was en route from Krakow, Poland to Prague derailed after the collision at 140km/h (87mph).
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Original:  The EuroCity train from Krakow in Poland to Prague derailed after the collision at 140km/h (87mph).
Revised:  The EuroCity train from Krakow in Poland to Prague , derailed after it collided while traveling at 140km/h (87mph).
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Original:  According to Czech Railways spokesman Radek Joklik  " It probably hit part of a motorway bridge under construction which fell onto the track."
Revised:  According to Czech Railways spokesman Radek Joklik , " It probably hit part of a motorway bridge under construction which fell onto the track."
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Original:  According to Czech Railways spokesman Radek Joklik  " It probably hit part of a motorway bridge under construction which fell onto the track."
Revised:  According to Czech Railways spokesman Radek Joklik " it probably hit part of a motorway bridge under construction which fell onto the track."
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Original:  The train  was carrying 400 people, and has seen a derailment of the locomotive and the first three passenger carriages.
Revised:  The train , which was carrying 400 people, and has seen a derailment of the locomotive and the first three passenger carriages.
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Original:  The train  was carrying 400 people, and has seen a derailment of the locomotive and the first three passenger carriages.
Revised:  The train was carrying 400 people, saw a derailment of the locomotive and the first three passenger carriages.
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Original:  The train  was carrying 400 people, and has seen a derailment of the locomotive and the first three passenger carriages.
Revised:  The train was carrying 400 people, and has seen a derailment of its locomotive and first three passenger carriages.
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Original:  Numerous ambulances and several helicopters are transporting the wounded to hospital  
Revised:  Numerous ambulances and several helicopters are transporting the wounded to hospital . 
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Original:  The EuroCity train, which was en route from Krakow , Poland to Prague, derailed after it collided while traveling at 140km/h (87mph).
Revised:  The EuroCity train, which was en route from Kraków , Poland to Prague, derailed after it collided while traveling at 140km/h (87mph).
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Original:  It is understood that the bridge, which is near Studenka , may have fallen onto the train, crushing carriages below it.
Revised:  It is believed that the bridge, which is near Studenka , may have fallen onto the train, crushing carriages below it.
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Original:  It is understood that the bridge, which is near Studenka , may have fallen onto the train, crushing carriages below it.
Revised:  It is understood that the bridge, which is near Studénka , may have fallen onto the train, crushing carriages below it.
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Original: An express train struck a collapsed motorway bridge in the Czech Republic, leaving 7 people dead and cca 70 injured.
Revised: An express train struck a collapsed motorway bridge in the Czech Republic, leaving 7 people dead and 70 injured.
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Original:  It is extremely important that all those involved show restraint and play their part in bringing about a political solution.    [ 
Revised:  It is extremely important that all those involved show restraint and play their part in bringing about a political solution. " [ 
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Original:  For example  , the Swedish Minister for Foreign Affairs, Carl Bildt said that "the way in which the situation in South Ossetia has deteriorated is cause for profound concern.
Revised:  For example Carl Bildt , the Swedish Minister for Foreign Affairs, Carl Bildt said that "the way in which the situation in South Ossetia has deteriorated is cause for profound concern.
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Original:  For example  , the Swedish Minister for Foreign Affairs, Carl Bildt said that "the way in which the situation in South Ossetia has deteriorated is cause for profound concern.
Revised:  For example , the Swedish Minister for Foreign Affairs, said that "the way in which the situation in South Ossetia has deteriorated is cause for profound concern.
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Original:  The secretary general of the United Nations, Ban Ki-Moon, urged "the parties [involved in the conflict] to refrain from any action that could further escalate the situation and threaten the stability of the region."
Revised:  The Secretary-General of the United Nations, Ban Ki-Moon, urged "the parties [involved in the conflict] to refrain from any action that could further escalate the situation and threaten the stability of the region."
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Original:  The President of Lithuania,Valdas Adamkus, called for European governments to intervene “it is only through active and common efforts of the entire Europe and through new initiatives that the frozen conflicts could be resolved and inefficient negotiation formats could be changed 
Revised:  The President of Lithuania,Valdas Adamkus, called for European governments to intervene “it is only through active and common efforts of the entire Europe and through new initiatives that the frozen conflicts could be resolved and inefficient negotiation formats could be changed .
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Original: Various governments and the United Nations have expressed concern over the current situation in South Ossetia.
Revised: Several governments and the United Nations have expressed concern over the current situation in South Ossetia.
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Original:  For example Carl Bildt, the Swedish Minister for Foreign Affairs,  said that "the way in which the situation in South Ossetia has deteriorated is cause for profound concern.
Revised:  Carl Bildt, the Swedish Minister for Foreign Affairs, said that "the way in which the situation in South Ossetia has deteriorated is cause for profound concern.
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Original:  For example Carl Bildt, the Swedish Minister for Foreign Affairs,  said that "the way in which the situation in South Ossetia has deteriorated is cause for profound concern.
Revised:  For example Carl Bildt, the Swedish Minister for Foreign Affairs, has said that "the way in which the situation in South Ossetia has deteriorated is cause for profound concern.
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Original:  Bildt then said that "there have been reports of Russian warplanes having dropped bombs inside Georgia, beyond South Ossetia, and these reports have now been confirmed by various parties.
Revised:  Bildt pointed out that "there have been reports of Russian warplanes having dropped bombs inside Georgia, beyond South Ossetia, and these reports have now been confirmed by various parties.
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Original:  The President of Lithuania, Valdas Adamkus, called for European governments to intervene “it is only through active and common efforts of the entire Europe and through new initiatives that the frozen conflicts could be resolved and inefficient negotiation formats could be changed.
Revised:  The President of Lithuania, Valdas Adamkus, called for European governments to intervene : "It is only through active and common efforts of the entire Europe and through new initiatives that the frozen conflicts could be resolved and inefficient negotiation formats could be changed.
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Original: Four current and former British Airways (BA) employees have been charged with price fixing by the United Kingdom's Office of Fair Trading  .
Revised: Four current and former British Airways (BA) employees have been charged with price fixing by the United Kingdom's Office of Fair Trading (OFT) .
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Original: Elizabeth and John Edwards on " The Tonight Show.
Revised: Elizabeth and John Edwards on The Tonight Show.
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Original:  " Former US Senator John Edwards admitted today to ABC News that he had an extramarital affair with novice filmmaker Rielle Hunter while his wife , Elizabeth, was battling cancer.
Revised:  Former US Senator John Edwards admitted today to ABC News that he had an extramarital affair with novice filmmaker Rielle Hunter while his wife , Elizabeth, was battling cancer.
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Original:  Edwards has said that the affair began during his recent presidental campaign after Hunter was hired for $114,000 to produce campaign website documentaries.
Revised:  Edwards has said that the affair began during his recent presidential campaign after Hunter was hired for $114,000 to produce campaign website documentaries.
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Original:  Edwards also said that he has told his wife, Elizabeth, and others about the affair .
Revised:  Edwards also said that he told his wife, Elizabeth, and others about the affair .
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Original:  Edwards was the Democratic vice president nominee in 2004 and was a contender for this year's Democratic presidential nomination
Revised:  Edwards was the Democratic Vice Presidential nominee in 2004 and was a contender for this year's Democratic presidential nomination
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Original:  In fact, Edwards continue to deny the reports even two weeks ago .
Revised:  Just 2 weeks ago, Edwards denied yet again any affair between himself and Hunter .
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Original:  A former aide to Edward's presidential campaign, Andrew Young, has reportedly said that Edwards is the father of Hunter's child, Frances Quinn.
Revised:  A former aide to Edward's presidential campaign, Andrew Young, has reportedly said that he is the father of Hunter's child, Frances Quinn.
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Original:  However , in an interview for tonight's edition of Nightline, the former Senator and presidential hopeful also told ABC News' Bob Woodruff that while he has not taken a paternity test, he is not the father of Quinn.
Revised:  Also , in an interview for tonight's edition of Nightline, the former Senator and presidential hopeful also told ABC News' Bob Woodruff that while he has not taken a paternity test, he is not the father of Quinn.
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Original:  However , in an interview for tonight's edition of Nightline, the former Senator and presidential hopeful also told ABC News' Bob Woodruff that while he has not taken a paternity test, he is not the father of Quinn.
Revised:  However , in an interview for tonight's edition of Nightline, the former Senator and presidential hopeful told ABC News' Bob Woodruff that while he has not taken a paternity test, he is not the father of Quinn.
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Original: Former US Senator John Edwards admitted today to ABC News that he had an extramarital affair with novice filmmaker Rielle Hunter while his wife was in remission with cancer.
Revised: Former United States Senator John Edwards admitted today to ABC News that he had an extramarital affair with novice filmmaker Rielle Hunter while his wife was in remission with cancer.
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Original:  Just 2 weeks ago, Edwards denied yet again any affair between himself and Hunter.
Revised:  As recently as two weeks ago, Edwards denied yet again any affair between himself and Hunter.
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Original:  Just 2 weeks ago, Edwards denied yet again any affair between himself and Hunter.
Revised:  Just 2 weeks ago, Edwards still denied any affair between himself and Hunter.
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Original: Events Men's 10m air pistol 40px The chinese man ching pong wo Won and beat ljfgvluiv the country The Silver medal went to the South Korean Jin Jong Oh and the North Korean Kim Jong Su won the bronze medal.
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Original: Man from Phillipines dies in coma A 38 year old man died from being in a coma for 5 days in the Phillipines.
Revised: Man from Philippines dies in coma A 38 year old man died from being in a coma for 5 days in the Phillipines.
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Original: Man from Philippines dies in coma Dennis Cuesta a radio journalist from the Philippine has died after suffering five gunshot wounds.
Revised: Man from Philippines dies in coma Dennis Cuesta a radio journalist from the Philippines has died after suffering five gunshot wounds.
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Original: Man from Philippines dies in coma  Dennis Cuesta a radio journalist from the Philippines has died after suffering five gunshot wounds.
Revised: Journalist from Philippines dies in coma Dennis Cuesta a radio journalist from the Philippines has died after suffering five gunshot wounds.
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Original:  South Ossetia is a former province of Georgia that broke away to and declared its independence back on November 28, 1991
Revised:  South Ossetia is a former province of Georgia that broke away from Georgia and declared its independence back on November 28, 1991
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Original:  South Ossetia is a former province of Georgia that broke away to and declared its independence back on November 28, 1991
Revised:  South Ossetia is a former province of Georgia that broke away to and declared its independence on November 28, 1991
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Original:  Save the little nation from the annihilation!, State Commitee for Information and Press of South Ossetia, 9.08.2008 - 19:37 South Ossetia is a former province of Georgia that broke away from Georgia and declared its independence on November 28, 1991.
Revised:  South Ossetia is a former province of Georgia that broke away from Georgia and declared its independence on November 28, 1991.
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Original:  Save the little nation from the annihilation!, State Commitee for Information and Press of South Ossetia, 9.08.2008 - 19:37 South Ossetia is a former province of Georgia that broke away from Georgia and declared its independence on November 28, 1991.
Revised:  Save the little nation from the annihilation!, State Commitee for Information and Press of South Ossetia, 9.08.2008 - 19:37 South Ossetia is a former province of Georgia that broke away from Georgia and declared its independence on November 28, 
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Original: This move comes soon after ]  Saakashvili's declarations that his country is now in a state of war.
Revised: This move comes soon after ...] Saakashvili's declarations that his country is now in a state of war.
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Original: At the same time, what is according to the english Wikipedia the South Ossetian State news agencies website has released a statement titled "Save the little nation from the annihilation!".
Revised: At the same time, South Ossetian State news agencies website has released a statement titled "Save the little nation from the annihilation!".
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Original: At the same time, South Ossetian State Commitee for information and press has made a press release titled "Save the little nation from the annihilation!".
Revised: At the same time, South Ossetia's State Commitee for information and press has made a press release titled "Save the little nation from the annihilation!".
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Original:  According to the Russian Presidents office, around 30,000 people have left South Ossetia to seek refuge in Russia, and preparations are underway to provide tented and permanent accomodation for them.
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Original:  Russia responded to these actions by sending their own troops into to South Ossetia on August 8.
Revised:  Russia responded to these actions by sending their own troops into South Ossetia on August 8.
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Original:  The weather on the mountain was quite bad during the time of the climb.
Revised:  The weather on the mountain was quite bad during the time of the 
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Original:  URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% UR
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Original:  URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% UR
Revised:  URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% clim
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Original:  The weather on the mountain was quite bad during the time of the clim
Revised:  The weather on the mountain was quite bad during the time of the climb
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Original:  Two people were climbing a Swiss Mountain in the European country of Switzerland when the two died.
Revised:  Two people were climbing a Mountain in the European country of Switzerland when the two died.
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Original: The Matterhorn Two people were climbing a Mountain in the European country of Switzerlandwhen the two died .
Revised: The Matterhorn Two people were killed while mountain-climbing in the Switzerland .
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Original: The Matterhorn Two people were killed while mountain-climbing in the Switzerland.
Revised: The Matterhorn Two people have been killed while mountain-climbing in the Switzerland.
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Original: The Matterhorn Two people were killed while mountain-climbing in the Switzerland.
Revised: The Matterhorn Two people were killed while mountain-climbing in Switzerland.
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Original:  The man  53, and Woman 57  died on the Matterhorn Mountain at 13,100 feet altitude .
Revised:  The man , 53, and Woman 57 died on the Matterhorn Mountain at 13,100 feet altitude .
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Original:  The man  53, and Woman 57  died on the Matterhorn Mountain at 13,100 feet altitude .
Revised:  The man 53, and woman, 57 died on the Matterhorn Mountain at 13,100 feet altitude .
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Original:  The man  53, and Woman 57  died on the Matterhorn Mountain at 13,100 feet altitude .
Revised:  The man 53, and Woman 57 , died on the Matterhorn Mountain at 13,100 feet altitude .
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Original:  The man  53, and Woman 57  died on the Matterhorn Mountain at 13,100 feet altitude .
Revised:  The man 53, and Woman 57 died on the Matterhorn mountain at an altitude of around 13,100 feet altitude .
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Original:  A spokesman said they were climbing and fell to their deaths, and that no guide was taken with them during their attempted assent to the peak.
Revised:  A spokesman said they were climbing and fell to their deaths, and that no guide was taken with them during their attempted ascent to the peak.
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Original:  The  man, 53, and woman, 57, died on the Matterhorn mountain at an altitude of around 13,100 feet (4000m).
Revised:  The bodies of the man, 53, and woman, 57, died on the Matterhorn mountain at an altitude of around 13,100 feet (4000m).
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Original:  The  man, 53, and woman, 57, died on the Matterhorn mountain at an altitude of around 13,100 feet (4000m).
Revised:  The man, 53, and woman, 57, were found on the Matterhorn mountain at an altitude of around 13,100 feet (4000m).
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Original:  The  man, 53, and woman, 57, died on the Matterhorn mountain at an altitude of around 13,100 feet (4000m).
Revised:  The man, 53, and woman, 57, died on the Matterhorn at an altitude of around 13,100 feet (4000m).
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Original:  Their names have not  been released due to Swiss privacy laws;
Revised:  Their names have not yet been released due to Swiss privacy laws;
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Original:  The weather on the mountain was quite bad during the time of the climb
Revised:  The weather on the mountain was apparently bad during the time of the climb
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Original:  The weather on the mountain was apparently bad during the time of the climb  
Revised:  The weather on the mountain was apparently bad during the time of the climb . 
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Original: Ohioville creek bones are not human Some bones were found in a Ohioville, Pennsylvania creek , and are said to be not human according the authorities.
Revised: Ohioville creek bones are not human Some bones were found in a Ohioville, Pennsylvania creek , and are said to be human according the authorities.
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Original:  The bones were found in , Little Beaver Creek and are said to be from a dog, deer or another large mammal
Revised:  The bones were found in Little Beaver Creek and are said to be from a dog, deer or another large mammal
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Original: Ohioville creek bones are not human Some bones  were found in a Ohioville, Pennsylvania creek and are no longer said to be human according the authorities.
Revised: Ohioville creek bones are not human Some bones that were found in a Ohioville, Pennsylvania creek and are no longer said to be human according the authorities.
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Original: Ohioville creek bones are not human Some bones  were found in a Ohioville, Pennsylvania creek and are no longer said to be human according the authorities.
Revised: Ohioville creek bones are not human Some bones were found in a Ohioville, Pennsylvania creek are no longer said to be human according the authorities.
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Original:  The 401, a major Highway has been closed near the area;
Revised:  The 401, a major highway has been closed near the area;
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Original:  eastbound 401 has been shut down between 400 and Allen Road, westbound shut down from 404/DVP to Highway 400
Revised:  Eastbound 401 has been shut down between 400 and Allen Road, westbound shut down from 404/DVP to Highway 400
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Original:  All of the injuries reported so far have ben minor.
Revised:  All of the injuries reported so far have been minor.
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Original:  the explosion was seen as far as Ossington Avenue and heard as far as Bloor & Jarvis in Toronto.
Revised:  the explosion was seen at Ossington Avenue and heard as far as Bloor & Jarvis in Toronto.
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Original:  the explosion was seen as far as Ossington Avenue and heard as far as Bloor & Jarvis in Toronto.
Revised:  the explosion was seen as far as Ossington Avenue and heard in Bloor & Jarvis in Toronto.
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Original:  it is believed he suffered a heart attack, but it is unknown whether he was fighting the fire or taking a rest .
Revised:  efforts were made to revive him, but were unsuccesful .
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Original: The explosion seen from the Keele Overpass Multiple large explosions have been reported at Sunshine Propane Industrial Gases, a propane facility in northern Toronto near Keele Street and Wilson Street near the Highway 401, at approximately between 3:25 and 3:50 am EST, at Murray Rd. & Spalding Rd.
Revised: The explosion seen from the Keele Overpass Multiple large explosions have been reported at Sunrise Propane Industrial Gases, a propane facility in northern Toronto near Keele Street and Wilson Street near the Highway 401, at approximately between 3:25 and 3:50 am EST, at Murray Rd. & Spalding Rd.
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Original: The explosion seen from the Keele Overpass Multiple large explosions have been reported at Sunrise Propane Industrial Gases, a propane facility in northern Toronto near Keele Street and Wilson Street near the Highway 401, at approximately between 3:25 and 3:50 am EST, at Murray Rd. & Spalding Rd.
Revised:  Multiple large explosions have been reported at Sunrise Propane Industrial Gases, a propane facility in northern Toronto near Keele Street and Wilson Street near the Highway 401, at approximately between 3:25 and 3:50 am EST, at Murray Rd. & Spalding Rd.
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Original: At least eighteen injuries have been reported, with one person still unnacounted for.
Revised: At least eighteen injuries have been reported, with one person still unaccounted for.
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Original: A witness who was in Niagara-on-the-Lake at the time witnessed the entire skyline of Toronto lightning up;
Revised: A witness who was in Niagara-on-the-Lake at the time witnessed the entire skyline of Toronto lighting up;
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