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Original:  A Saturday, July 26th, meeting of the Senate resulted in the passing of a $300 billion housing aid bill designed to help homeowners facing foreclosure by providing financial aid.
Revised: The United States Capitol building, where the Senate meets A Saturday, July 26th, meeting of the Senate resulted in the passing of a $300 billion housing aid bill designed to help homeowners facing foreclosure by providing financial aid.
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Original: The United States Capitol building, where the Senate meets A Saturday, July 26th, meeting of the Senate resulted in the passing of a $300 billion housing aid bill designed to help homeowners facing foreclosure by providing financial aid.
Revised:  A Saturday, July 26th, meeting of the Senate resulted in the passing of a $300 billion housing aid bill designed to help homeowners facing foreclosure by providing financial aid.
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Original:  President Bush had initial woes about the bill based upon a $3.9 billion part of the legislation allowing for repurchase and improvement of foreclosed homes by the housing crisis stricken neighborhoods.
Revised:  President Bush had initial woes about the bill based upon a $3.9 billion part of the legislation allowing for repurchase and improvement of foreclosed homes by the stricken neighborhoods.
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Original:  Bush has since changed his mind on the matter and is expected to sign it in the near future.
Revised:  Bush has since changed his mind on the matter and is expected to sign the bill in the near future.
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Original:  Despite the bill's overwhelming passage , it has had its dissidents.
Revised:  Despite the bill's overwhelming support , it has had its dissidents.
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Original: A Saturday, July 26th, meeting of the  Senate resulted in the passing of a $300 billion housing aid bill designed to help homeowners facing foreclosure by providing financial aid.
Revised: A Saturday, July 26th, meeting of the United States Senate resulted in the passing of a $300 billion housing aid bill designed to help homeowners facing foreclosure by providing financial aid.
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Original:  Senator Christopher Dodd of Connecticut said that "this bill is going to make a difference almost immediately."
Revised:  Senator of Connecticut said that "this bill is going to make a difference almost immediately."
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Original:  "We are pretending to chain a monster here and we are, instead, letting that monster loose," said Arizona Representative Jeff Flake .
Revised:  "We are pretending to chain a monster here and we are, instead, letting that monster loose," said Arizona Representative .
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Original:  Originally a supporter of the bill, Senator Charles Grassley of Iowa has changed his opinion because of the addition of the emergency fund for Fannie Mae and Freddie Mac. "This bill has fallen prey to the special interests on Wall Street and K Street at an unjustifiable expense to taxpayers and homeowners on Main Street," said Grassley
Revised:  Originally a supporter of the bill, Senator of Iowa has changed his opinion because of the addition of the emergency fund for Fannie Mae and Freddie Mac. "This bill has fallen prey to the special interests on Wall Street and K Street at an unjustifiable expense to taxpayers and homeowners on Main Street," said Grassley
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Original: Image:Puffin2.jpg|A puffin in Iceland Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, England's largest colony.
Revised:  Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, England's largest colony.
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Original:   Numbers of puffins have also been declining on the Isle of May, 100 miles north.
Revised:  Numbers of puffins have been declining on the Isle of May, 100 miles north.
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Original:  It is believed that man-made causes, such as over-fishing or climate change lower the amount of food available to puffins, causing them to starve whilst out at sea
Revised:  It is believed that man-made causes, such as over-fishing or climate change has lowered the amount of food available to puffins, causing them to starve whilst out at sea
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Original: Image:Puffin2.jpg|150px|A puffin in Iceland]] Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands,  England's largest colony.
Revised: Image:Puffin2.jpg|150px|A puffin in Iceland]] Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has England's largest colony.
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Original: Image:Puffin2.jpg|150px|A puffin in Iceland]] Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has England 's largest colony.
Revised: Image:Puffin2.jpg|150px|A puffin in Iceland]] Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has United Kingdom 's largest colony.
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Original:  Numbers of puffins have  been declining on the Isle of May, 100 miles north.
Revised:  Numbers of puffins have also been declining on the Isle of May, 100 miles north.
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Original: Image:Puffin2.jpg| 150px|A puffin in Iceland Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has United Kingdom's largest colony.
Revised:  150px|A puffin in Iceland Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has United Kingdom's largest colony.
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Original:  Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has United Kingdom's largest colony  .
Revised:  Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, where the United Kingdom's largest colony .
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Original:  Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has United Kingdom's largest colony  .
Revised:  Puffin numbers are declining on the Farne Islands, which has United Kingdom's largest colony resides .
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Original:  During the past five years, numbers on the islands have decreased by a third.
Revised:  During the past five years, the puffin population on the islands have decreased by a third.
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Original:  During the past five years, numbers on the islands have decreased by a third.
Revised:  During the past five years, numbers on the islands has decreased by a third.
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Original:  Experts had expected numbers to rise this year, but believe the declineis due the birds being unable to find food  .
Revised:  Experts had expected numbers to rise this year, but now with news of the decline, are citing an inability to find food .
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Original:  A report from the Indonesian director-general of civil aviation said that between January and April Garuda performed just nine of 56 mandatory surveys, while Mandala conducted only two out of 27    
Revised:  A report from the Indonesian director-general of civil aviation said that between January and April Garuda performed just nine of 56 mandatory surveys, while Mandala conducted only two out of 27. 
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Original: The European Union has maintained its ban on all 51 of Indonesia's airlines on safety grounds .
Revised: The European Union has maintained its ban on all 51 of Indonesia's airlines on the grounds of safety concerns .
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Original:  The Indonesian foreign ministry, which had earlier believed its plan to "fast-track" safety improvements for three airlines would see them back in the EU by July's end, suggested  the ban may have political overtones.
Revised:  The Indonesian foreign ministry, which had earlier believed its plan to "fast-track" safety improvements for three airlines would see them back in the EU by July's end, suggested that the ban may have political overtones.
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Original:  Indonesia had implemented a programme to bring state-owned flag carrier Garuda Indonesia up to EU standards, as well as private rivals Mandala Airlines and Airfast.
Revised:  Indonesia had implemented a program to bring state-owned flag carrier Garuda Indonesia up to EU standards, as well as private rivals Mandala Airlines and Airfast.
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Original:  It also said that Indonesia had no effective oversight programme and that the International Civil Aviation Organisation had been unable to assess recent changes.
Revised:  It was added that Indonesia had no effective oversight programme and that the International Civil Aviation Organisation had been unable to assess recent changes.
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Original:  It also said that Indonesia had no effective oversight programme and that the International Civil Aviation Organisation had been unable to assess recent changes.
Revised:  It also said that Indonesia had no effective oversight program and that the International Civil Aviation Organisation had been unable to assess recent changes.
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Original:  It also said that inspectors did not have the power to ground substandard aircraft and urged Indonesia to increase inspections themselves as well .
Revised:  The committee also noted that inspectors did not have the power to ground substandard aircraft and urged Indonesia to increase inspections themselves as well .
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Original:  It also said that inspectors did not have the power to ground substandard aircraft and urged Indonesia to increase inspections themselves as well .
Revised:  It also said that inspectors did not have the power to ground substandard aircraft and urged Indonesia to increase inspections themselves .
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Original:  A report from the Indonesian director-general of civil aviation said that  between January and April  Garuda performed just nine of 56 mandatory surveys, while Mandala conducted only two out of 27.
Revised:  A report from the Indonesian director-general of civil aviation said that , between January and April Garuda performed just nine of 56 mandatory surveys, while Mandala conducted only two out of 27.
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Original:  A report from the Indonesian director-general of civil aviation said that  between January and April  Garuda performed just nine of 56 mandatory surveys, while Mandala conducted only two out of 27.
Revised:  A report from the Indonesian director-general of civil aviation said that between January and April , Garuda performed just nine of 56 mandatory surveys, while Mandala conducted only two out of 27.
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Original:  Teuku Faizasyah, spokesman for the Indonesian foreign ministry, expressed disapointment a the result , and questioned the reasoning behind it.
Revised:  Teuku Faizasyah, spokesman for the Indonesian foreign ministry, expressed disappointment at the result and questioned the reasoning behind it.
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Original:  We've done some improvements so we do hope that those actions taken could be considered," he told reporters , going on to say "The way we see it, the EU always puts their actions (in terms of) technicality issues.
Revised:  We've done some improvements so we do hope that those actions taken could be considered," he told reporters . "The way we see it, the EU always puts their actions (in terms of) technicality issues.
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Original:  The ban was implemented in 2007 after deregulation in the 1990s  triggered a string of aviation accidents.
Revised:  The ban was implemented in 2007 following deregulation in the 1990s triggered a string of aviation accidents.
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Original:  The ban was implemented in 2007 after deregulation in the 1990s  triggered a string of aviation accidents.
Revised:  The ban was implemented in 2007 after deregulation in the 1990s that triggered a string of aviation accidents.
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Original:  On New Year's Day 2007  102 people were killed when an Adam Air Boeing 737 crashed into the ocean near Sulawesi , and this was followed in March by a Garuda 737 overshooting the runway at Yogyakarta Internataional Airport with 21 fatalities.
Revised:  On New Year's Day 2007 , 102 people were killed when an Adam Air Boeing 737 crashed into the ocean near Sulawesi , and this was followed in March by a Garuda 737 overshooting the runway at Yogyakarta Internataional Airport with 21 fatalities.
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Original:  On New Year's Day 2007  102 people were killed when an Adam Air Boeing 737 crashed into the ocean near Sulawesi , and this was followed in March by a Garuda 737 overshooting the runway at Yogyakarta Internataional Airport with 21 fatalities.
Revised:  On New Year's Day 2007 102 people were killed when an Adam Air Boeing 737 crashed into the ocean near Sulawesi . This was followed in March by a Garuda 737 overshooting the runway at Yogyakarta Internataional Airport with 21 fatalities.
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Original: Australian Transport Safety Bureau announced that a oxygen cylinder which was located near the area of the explosion on Qantas flight QF30 from London, England to Melbourne, Australia , was unaccounted for but said that it was too early to say that an oxygen cylinder could be the cause of the mid-air explosion but had ruled out explosives as a cause stating that they "found no indication of explosives".
Revised: Australian Transport Safety Bureau announced that an oxygen cylinder which was located near the area of the explosion on Qantas flight QF30 from London, England to Melbourne, Australia , was unaccounted for but said that it was too early to say that an oxygen cylinder could be the cause of the mid-air explosion but had ruled out explosives as a cause stating that they "found no indication of explosives".
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Original: Australian Transport Safety Bureau announced that a oxygen cylinder which was located near the area of the explosion on Qantas flight QF30 from London, England to Melbourne, Australia , was unaccounted for but said that it was too early to say that an oxygen cylinder could be the cause of the mid-air explosion but had ruled out explosives as a cause stating that they "found no indication of explosives".
Revised: Australian Transport Safety Bureau announced that a oxygen cylinder which was located near the area of the explosion on Qantas flight QF30 from London, England to Melbourne, Australia was unaccounted for but said that it was too early to say that an oxygen cylinder could be the cause of the mid-air explosion but had ruled out explosives as a cause stating that they "found no indication of explosives".
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Original: Australian Transport Safety Bureau announced that a oxygen cylinder which was located near the area of the explosion on Qantas flight QF30 from London, England to Melbourne, Australia , was unaccounted for but said that it was too early to say that an oxygen cylinder could be the cause of the mid-air explosion but had ruled out explosives as a cause stating that they "found no indication of explosives".
Revised: Australian Transport Safety Bureau announced that a oxygen cylinder which was located near the area of the explosion on Qantas flight QF30 from London, England to Melbourne, Australia , was unaccounted for but said that it was too early to say that an oxygen cylinder could be the cause of the mid-air explosion . It did say it had ruled out explosives as a cause stating that they "found no indication of explosives".
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Original:   Civil Aviation Safety Authority has ordered Qantas to check all oxygen cylinders and brackets which holds the cylinders on its Boeing 747 fleet but hasn't ruled out that the order will be extended to all of the Qantas fleet.
Revised:  The Civil Aviation Safety Authority has ordered Qantas to check all oxygen cylinders and brackets which holds the cylinders on its Boeing 747 fleet but hasn't ruled out that the order will be extended to all of the Qantas fleet.
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Original:   Civil Aviation Safety Authority has ordered Qantas to check all oxygen cylinders and brackets which holds the cylinders on its Boeing 747 fleet but hasn't ruled out that the order will be extended to all of the Qantas fleet.
Revised:  Civil Aviation Safety Authority has ordered Qantas to check all oxygen cylinders and the brackets which hold them on its Boeing 747 fleet but hasn't ruled out that the order will be extended to all of the Qantas fleet.
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Original:   Civil Aviation Safety Authority has ordered Qantas to check all oxygen cylinders and brackets which holds the cylinders on its Boeing 747 fleet but hasn't ruled out that the order will be extended to all of the Qantas fleet.
Revised:  Civil Aviation Safety Authority has ordered Qantas to check all oxygen cylinders and brackets which holds the cylinders on its Boeing 747s, but hasn't ruled out that the order will be extended to all of the Qantas fleet.
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Original: Youssef Chahine Youssef Chahine , the Egyptian film director has died aged 82.
Revised: Youssef Chahine , the Egyptian film director has died aged 82.
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Original:   Born in 1926, Chahine was credited with launching the career of actor Omar Sharif.
Revised:  Youssef Chahine Born in 1926, Chahine was credited with launching the career of actor Omar Sharif.
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Original: Image:Knoxville TN skyline.jpg|Knoxville, Tennessee skyline ]]On Sunday morning, at Tennessee Valley Unitarian Universalist Church in Knoxville, Tennessee, a gunman identified as 58 year old Powell, TN resident Jim D. Adkisson fired a number of shots with a shotgun, killing one person , and wounding at least six others.
Revised: Image:Knoxville TN skyline.jpg|Knoxville, Tennessee skyline ]]On Sunday morning, at Tennessee Valley Unitarian Universalist Church in Knoxville, Tennessee, a gunman identified as 58 year old Powell, TN resident Jim Adkisson fired a number of shots with a shotgun, killing one person , and wounding at least six others.
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Original:  Greg McKendry, the one victim who was killed as a result of the shootings reportedly "stood in the front of the gunman and took the blast to protect the rest of us," said Barbara Kemper, a witness to the shooting.
Revised:  Greg McKendry, one of the victims who was killed as a result of the shootings reportedly "stood in the front of the gunman and took the blast to protect the rest of us," said Barbara Kemper, a witness to the shooting.
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Original:   A church member, Steve Drevik, described the gunmen as a "man with long blond hair, who appeared to be in his 40s."
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Original:  Authorities believe that all the wounded people are adults, and that no children were injured .
Revised:  The police have stated that no children were injured .
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Original:  Unitarian Universalism is a theologically liberal church religious, separate from mainstream Christianity, that promotes desegregation, fights for female and gay rights, and participates in different charitable outreaches.
Revised:  Unitarian Universalism is a theologically liberal church religious, separate from mainstream Christianity, that promotes desegregation, fights for womens and gays rights, and participates in different charitable outreaches.
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Original: Image:Knoxville TN skyline.jpg|Knoxville, Tennessee skyline ]]On Sunday morning, at Tennessee Valley Unitarian Universalist Church in Knoxville, Tennessee, a gunman identified as 58 year old Powell, TN resident Jim Adkisson fired a number of shots with a .12 gauge shotgun, killing two people, and wounding seven others.
Revised: Image:Knoxville TN skyline.jpg|Knoxville, Tennessee skyline ]]On Sunday morning, at Tennessee Valley Unitarian Universalist Church in Knoxville, Tennessee, a gunman identified as 58 year old Powell, TN resident Jim Adkisson fired a number of shots with a 12 gauge shotgun, killing two people, and wounding seven others.
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Original: Image:Knoxville TN skyline.jpg|Knoxville, Tennessee skyline On Sunday morning, at Tennessee Valley Unitarian Universalist Church in Knoxville, Tennessee, a gunman identified as 58 year old Powell, TN resident Jim Adkisson fired a number of shots with a 12 gauge shotgun, killing two people, and wounding seven others.
Revised:  On Sunday morning, at Tennessee Valley Unitarian Universalist Church in Knoxville, Tennessee, a gunman identified as 58 year old Powell, TN resident Jim Adkisson fired a number of shots with a 12 gauge shotgun, killing two people, and wounding seven others.
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Original:  The other person to die from the gunfire was 61 year old , Linda Kreager.
Revised:  The other person to die from the gunfire was 61 year old Linda Kreager.
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Original: The motive of the crime was Adkisson's annoyance at his unability to get a job, and a general hatred of the "liberal movement," said the police on monday.
Revised: The motive of the crime was Adkisson's annoyance at his inability to get a job, and a general hatred of the "liberal movement," said the police on monday.
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Original:  Unitarian Universalism is a theologically liberal religion, separate from mainstream Christianity, that promotes desegregation, fights for womens and gays rights, and participates in different charitable outreaches.
Revised:  Unitarian Universalism is a theologically liberal religion, separate from mainstream Christianity, that promotes desegregation, fights for women's and gay rights, and participates in different charitable outreaches.
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Original: The pier before the fire.
Revised: The pier ablaze
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Original: The pier ablaze  On Monday morning at approximately 6:45am the Weston-super-Mare Grand Pier pavilion caught fire.
Revised: The pier ablaze . On Monday morning at approximately 6:45am the Weston-super-Mare Grand Pier pavilion caught fire.
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Original:  As of 9:00am the building has been almost completely destroyed, with the structural metal framework having fallen in on itself.
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Original:  The Fire service were having difficulty getting enough water to the fire to dampen the flames as the pier is a half of a mile out to sea and the tide was out at the time the pier first caught fire.
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Original:      This is the second time the Grand Pier  has been destroyed by fire , the other being in 1930  , after which it did not re-open until 1933.
Revised:  No one was injured in the blaze, which destroyed the pier. Firefighters said they believe the fire started in an area containing deep fat fryers. Smoke could be seen as far away as ten miles. This is the second time the Grand Pier has been destroyed by fire , the other being in 1930 , after which it did not re-open until 1933.
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Original:      This is the second time the Grand Pier  has been destroyed by fire , the other being in 1930  , after which it did not re-open until 1933.
Revised:  This is the second time the Grand Pier has been destroyed by fire . In 1930 , after which it did not re-open until 1933.
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Original:   A local hotel operator described the fire as an "inferno" and said of the pier: "It is part of our identity and would really affect trade if we were to lose it."
Revised:  The pier ablaze. A local hotel operator described the fire as an "inferno" and said of the pier: "It is part of our identity and would really affect trade if we were to lose it."
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Original:  The Grand Pier  employed around 100 people, but other businesses  depended on it as an attraction.
Revised:  The Grand Pier employed around 100 people, but other businesses also depended on it as an attraction.
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Original:  There's nothing left now - Weston's doomed," said Nicky Mager who runs a family business of donkey rides and refreshment outlets on the seafront .
Revised:  There's nothing left now - Weston's doomed," said Nicky Mager who runs a family business of donkey rides and refreshment outlets in the seafront town .
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Original:  She also said that investigators are keeping an open mind to the possibilty of arson.
Revised:  She also said that investigators are keeping an open mind to the possibility of arson.
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Original:  He was jailed for six months after the court found he did not come to the stricken al-Salam 98  's aid   
Revised:  He was jailed for six months after the court found he did not come to the stricken al-Salam 98 '' 's aid 
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