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Original:  He was Minister of Finance and Cooperation of the then Bombay State and was  first Chairman of Khadi and Village Industries Commission.
Revised:  He was Minister of Finance and Cooperation of the then Bombay State and was the first Chairman of Khadi and Village Industries Commission.
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Original:  He was  Minister of Finance and Cooperation of the then Bombay State and was the first Chairman of Khadi and Village Industries Commission.
Revised:  He was the Minister of Finance and Cooperation of the then Bombay State and was the first Chairman of Khadi and Village Industries Commission.
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Original:  The contribution of Vaikunthbhai Mehta to the cause of Cooperative Education and Training was  pioneering and foundational.
Revised:  The contribution of Vaikunthbhai Mehta to the cause of Cooperative Education and Training was not pioneering and foundational.
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Original: Alpha Yaya Diallo ( born is a Guinean-born Canadian self-taught guitarist, singer and songwriter.
Revised: Alpha Yaya Diallo born is a Guinean-born Canadian self-taught guitarist, singer and songwriter.
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Original: Alpha Yaya Diallo born is a Guinean-born Canadian self-taught guitarist, singer and songwriter.
Revised: Alpha Yaya Diallo is a Guinean-born Canadian self-taught guitarist, singer and songwriter.
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Original:  While one simple band of décor was prevalent in Early Shang times, towards the middle and late Shang periods more than one band of décor was more common.
Revised:  While one simple band of décor was prevalent in early Shang times, towards the middle and late Shang periods more than one band of décor was more common.
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Original:  Historical developments The Erlitou Culture Period First Half of the Second Millennium B.C The origins of China's Bronze Age still remains unclear.
Revised:  Historical developments Erlitou culture (first half of the second millennium BCE) The origins of China's Bronze Age still remains unclear.
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Original:  The Zhengzhou Phase (The Erligang Period) Mid-Second Millennium B.C.
Revised:  Zhengzhou phase – Erligang period (mid-second millennium BCE)
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Original:  The Regional Bronze-Using Cultures 15th–11th Centuries B.C.
Revised:  Regional bronze-using cultures ( 15th–11th Centuries B.C.
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Original:  The Regional Bronze-Using Cultures 15th–11th Centuries B.C.
Revised:  The Regional Bronze-Using Cultures 15th–11th centuries BCE)
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Original:  The High Yinxu Phase (Anyang Period) About 1300 – About 1030 B.C. Apparently, an obvious upsurge of activity at the Anyang site is extant during the long reign of Wu Ding, fourth of the Anyang kings.
Revised:  High Yinxu phase – Anyang period (about 1300 – About 1030 B.C. Apparently, an obvious upsurge of activity at the Anyang site is extant during the long reign of Wu Ding, fourth of the Anyang kings.
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Original:  The High Yinxu Phase (Anyang Period) About 1300 – About 1030 B.C. Apparently, an obvious upsurge of activity at the Anyang site is extant during the long reign of Wu Ding, fourth of the Anyang kings.
Revised:  The High Yinxu Phase (Anyang Period) About 1300 – about 1030 B.C. Apparently, an obvious upsurge of activity at the Anyang site is extant during the long reign of Wu Ding, fourth of the Anyang kings.
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Original:  The High Yinxu Phase (Anyang Period) About 1300 – About 1030 B.C. Apparently, an obvious upsurge of activity at the Anyang site is extant during the long reign of Wu Ding, fourth of the Anyang kings.
Revised:  The High Yinxu Phase (Anyang Period) About 1300 – About 1030 BCE) Apparently, an obvious upsurge of activity at the Anyang site is extant during the long reign of Wu Ding, fourth of the Anyang kings.
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Original:  Style IV and Style V of Anyang Phase are seen from the two pairs of jia vessels in Fu Hao's tomb.
Revised:  Style IV and Style V of Anyang phase are seen from the two pairs of jia vessels in Fu Hao's tomb.
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Original:  Ritual Revolution During the Middle to Late Western Zhou period, changes in the ritual vessel types began to arise.
Revised:  Ritual revolution During the middle to late Western Zhou period, changes in the ritual vessel types began to arise.
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Original: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Examples Neolithic Pottery Jia Third object from the bottom of the webpage  Period: Erlitou cultural period about 2000 BCE -
Revised: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Neolithic Pottery Jia Third object from the bottom of the webpage Period: Erlitou cultural period about 2000 BCE -
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Original: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Examples Neolithic Pottery Jia Third object from the bottom of the webpage  Period: Erlitou cultural period about 2000 BCE -
Revised: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Examples examples Neolithic Pottery JiaThird object from the bottom of the webpage Period: Erlitou cultural period about 2000 BCE -
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Original: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Examples Neolithic Pottery Jia Third object from the bottom of the webpage  Period: Erlitou cultural period about 2000 BCE -
Revised: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Examples Neolithic Pottery Jia Third object from the bottom of the webpage . Period: Erlitou cultural period about 2000 BCE -
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Original: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Examples Neolithic Pottery Jia Third object from the bottom of the webpage  Period: Erlitou cultural period about 2000 BCE -
Revised: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Examples Neolithic Pottery Jia Third object from the bottom of the webpage Period: Erlitou cultural period Date: 2000 BCE -
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Original: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Examples Neolithic Pottery Jia Third object from the bottom of the webpage  Period: Erlitou cultural period about 2000 BCE -
Revised: [Rawson 1999, pp. 438] Important Examples Neolithic Pottery Jia Third object from the bottom of the webpage Period: Erlitou cultural period about 2000 –
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE Origin: Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H : 21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H : 21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Period: early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H : 21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H : 21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H : 21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: early Shang Date : 21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H : 15th–14th century BCE Dimension: height: 21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H : 21.9 cm, width : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H : 21.9 W : 14.5 cm, diameter : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H :  21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The decor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
Revised:  1600 BCE From Erlitou, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Erlitou Bronze Jia Location: Yanshi, Henan Province Period: Shang dynasty Date: Early Shang dynasty , Erlitou cultural phase , 1,600- 1,400 BCE Dimension: 31 cm H. Early to Middle Shang Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty Date: ca. 15th-14th century B.C.E. Early Shang period Dimension: H : 21.9 W : 14.5 D : 16.0 cm The décor of this Jia is within a single narrow register around the waist of the vessel.
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Original:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty (1600-1050 BCE), approx. 1500-1250 BCE (Middle Shang dynasty) Dimensions: H. 13 in x W. 8 in x D. 7 1/2 in , H. 33 cm x W. 20.3 cm x D. 19.1 cm  This is a beaker-shaped container with three hollow, pointed legs.
Revised:  Bronze Jia Period: middle Shang dynasty Date: 1500-1250 BCE (Middle Shang dynasty) Dimensions: H. 13 in x W. 8 in x D. 7 1/2 in , H. 33 cm x W. 20.3 cm x D. 19.1 cm This is a beaker-shaped container with three hollow, pointed legs.
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Original:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty (1600-1050 BCE), approx. 1500-1250 BCE (Middle Shang dynasty) Dimensions: H. 13 in x W. 8 in x D. 7 1/2 in , H. 33 cm x W. 20.3 cm x D. 19.1 cm  This is a beaker-shaped container with three hollow, pointed legs.
Revised:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty (1600-1050 BCE), approx. 1500-1250 BCE (Middle Shang dynasty) Dimensions: H. 13 in x W. 8 in x D. 7 1/2 in ( 19.1 cm This is a beaker-shaped container with three hollow, pointed legs.
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Original:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty (1600-1050 BCE), approx. 1500-1250 BCE (Middle Shang dynasty) Dimensions: H. 13 in x W. 8 in x D. 7 1/2 in , H. 33 cm x W. 20.3 cm x D. 19.1 cm  This is a beaker-shaped container with three hollow, pointed legs.
Revised:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang dynasty (1600-1050 BCE), approx. 1500-1250 BCE (Middle Shang dynasty) Dimensions: H. 13 in x W. 8 in x D. 7 1/2 in , H. 33 cm x W. 20.3 cm x D. 19.1 cm ) This is a beaker-shaped container with three hollow, pointed legs.
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Original:  This jia is one of the most elegant of the Middle Shang period.
Revised:  This jia is one of the most elegant of the middle Shang period.
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Original:  Set at right angles with the handle, they occupy the segment of the rim the farther away from this handle, which is another characteristic of the Middle Shang style.
Revised:  Set at right angles with the handle, they occupy the segment of the rim the farther away from this handle, which is another characteristic of the middle Shang style.
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Original:  Late Shang Anyang Phase Bronze Yayi Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Anyang Phase, 1300 BCE - 1050 BCE Dimensions: H. 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm  Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
Revised:  Late Shang – Anyang Bronze Yayi Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Anyang Phase, 1300 BCE - 1050 BCE Dimensions: H. 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
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Original:  Late Shang Anyang Phase Bronze Yayi Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Anyang Phase, 1300 BCE - 1050 BCE Dimensions: H. 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm  Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
Revised:  Late Shang Anyang Phase Bronze Yayi Jia Period: late Shang dynasty, Anyang phase Date: 1300 BCE - 1050 BCE Dimensions: H. 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
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Original:  Late Shang Anyang Phase Bronze Yayi Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Anyang Phase, 1300 BCE - 1050 BCE Dimensions: H. 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm  Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
Revised:  Late Shang Anyang Phase Bronze Yayi Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Anyang Phase, 1300 – 1050 BCE Dimensions: H. 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
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Original:  Late Shang Anyang Phase Bronze Yayi Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Anyang Phase, 1300 BCE - 1050 BCE Dimensions: H. 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm  Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
Revised:  Late Shang Anyang Phase Bronze Yayi Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Anyang Phase, 1300 BCE - 1050 BCE Dimensions: height: 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
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Original:  Late Shang Anyang Phase Bronze Yayi Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Anyang Phase, 1300 BCE - 1050 BCE Dimensions: H. 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm  Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
Revised:  Late Shang Anyang Phase Bronze Yayi Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Anyang Phase, 1300 BCE - 1050 BCE Dimensions: H. 29 5/8 in x W. 15 in x D. 12 1/2 in , H. 75.3 cm x W. 38.1 cm x D. 31.8 cm ) Details Inscription: Yayi Most jia vessels were used for pouring wine.
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Original:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Early Anyang Phase, 1200 BCE - 1100 BCE Height: 11 5/8 in . (29.5 cm . ) This jia has three blade-form legs.
Revised:  Bronze Jia Period: late Shang dynasty, early Anyang phase Date: 1200 BCE - 1100 BCE Height: 11 5/8 in . (29.5 cm . ) This jia has three blade-form legs.
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Original:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Early Anyang Phase, 1200 BCE - 1100 BCE Height: 11 5/8 in . (29.5 cm . ) This jia has three blade-form legs.
Revised:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Early Anyang Phase, 1200 – 1100 BCE Height: 11 5/8 in . (29.5 cm . ) This jia has three blade-form legs.
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Original:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Early Anyang Phase, 1200 BCE - 1100 BCE Height: 11 5/8 in . (29.5 cm . ) This jia has three blade-form legs.
Revised:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Early Anyang Phase, 1200 BCE - 1100 BCE Height: 11 5/8 in (29.5 cm . ) This jia has three blade-form legs.
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Original:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Early Anyang Phase, 1200 BCE - 1100 BCE Height: 11 5/8 in . (29.5 cm . ) This jia has three blade-form legs.
Revised:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang Dynasty(1600 - 1046 BCE) Date: Late Shang Dynasty, Early Anyang Phase, 1200 BCE - 1100 BCE Height: 11 5/8 in . (29.5 cm ) This jia has three blade-form legs.
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Original:  Bronze Jia Period: Shang Dynasty( 1600 - 1046 BCE ) Date: Late Shang Dynasty Height 29.3 cm From a Yin Tomb at Dasikongcun, Anyang  Bronze Fangjia Period: Shang Dynasty( 1600 - 1046 BCE ) Date: Late Shang Dynasty Height 67 cm (26.375 in .) Weight19.2 kg ( 42.25 lb (18.45 kg) Late Xiaotun Locus North, at Yinxu, Anyang, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Three large fangjia are found in Fu Hao's tomb.
Revised:  Bronze Jia Period: late Shang dynasty Date: 1600 - 1046 BCE ) Date: Late Shang Dynasty Height 29.3 cm From a Yin Tomb at Dasikongcun, Anyang Bronze Fangjia Period: Shang Dynasty( 1600 - 1046 BCE ) Date: Late Shang Dynasty Height 67 cm (26.375 in .) Weight19.2 kg ( 42.25 lb (18.45 kg) Late Xiaotun Locus North, at Yinxu, Anyang, Henan Province The Institute of Archaeology, CASS, Beijing Three large fangjia are found in Fu Hao's tomb.
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