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Original:  The results showed that most of the athletes often listened to music during pre-event, pre-training sessions, and warm-ups.
Revised:  The results showed that most of they often listened to music during pre-event, pre-training sessions, and warm-ups.
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Original:  The reasons why athletes reportedly listened to music were because they felt that it increased activation, positive affect, motivation, performance levels, and flow.
Revised:  The athletes gave as reasons for listening to music that they felt that it increased activation, positive affect, motivation, performance levels, and flow.
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Original:  In order to do this they installed the kits into three different workout machines, one a stair-stepper, the other two weight machines with bars that could be raised or pulled down to stimulate various muscles.
Revised:  To do this, they installed the kits into three different workout machines, one a stair-stepper, the other two weight machines with bars that could be raised or pulled down to stimulate various muscles.
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Original:  Crazy enough, the music had no effect  on their heart rate or running pace, regardless of the music's tempo.
Revised:  The music had no effect on their heart rate or running pace, regardless of the music's tempo.
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Original: Major empirical findings Physiological Effects People "automatically feel the beat" of the music they listen to and instinctively adjust their walking pace and heart rate to the tempo of the music .
Revised: Major empirical findings Physiological effects People "automatically feel the beat" of the music they listen to and instinctively adjust their walking pace and heart rate to the tempo of the music .
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Original:  Psychological Effects Listening to music while exercising has been found in multiple studies to create an increased sense of motivation, distracting the mind while increasing heart rate.
Revised:  Psychological effects Listening to music while exercising has been found in multiple studies to create an increased sense of motivation, distracting the mind while increasing heart rate.
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Original:  ”. Kaufman, Will, and Heidi Slettedahl Macpherson.
Revised:  Kaufman, Will, and Heidi Slettedahl Macpherson.
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Original:  Her characters are often maligned by history and subjected to a foreign culture, while Kincaid herself has become and increasingly mainstream American writer”
Revised:  Her characters are often maligned by history and subjected to a foreign culture, while Kincaid herself has become an increasingly mainstream American writer”
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Original:  He named the island Antigua after the saint Santa Maria de la Antigua.
Revised:  He named it Antigua after the saint Santa Maria de la Antigua.
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Original:  Dolby corroborates Kincaid’s depiction of the tourist creating separation by “othering” the locale and the individuals that inhabit it.
Revised:  Dolby corroborates Kincaid’s depiction of the tourist creating separation by "othering" the locale and the individuals that inhabit it.
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Original:  While Kincaid expresses anger towards slavery, colonialism and the broken Antiguan identity that it has left in its wake, she avoids retreating to simple racialization in order to explain the past and present, for doing so would further “other” an already marginalized group of people.
Revised:  While Kincaid expresses anger towards slavery, colonialism and the broken Antiguan identity that it has left in its wake, she avoids retreating to simple racialization in order to explain the past and present, for doing so would further "other" an already marginalized group of people.
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Original:  Kincaid sheds light on the oppressive hierarchical structures of colonialism, which is still evident in the learned power structures of present day, post- colonial Antigua.
Revised:  Kincaid sheds light on the oppressive hierarchical structures of colonialism, which is still evident in the learned power structures of present-day, post-colonial Antigua.
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Original:  Positive Reception Kincaid’s work has received mixed reviews, both positive and negative.
Revised:  Positive reception Kincaid’s work has received mixed reviews, both positive and negative.
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Original:  Being an enraged essay focusing on racism and the effects of colonialism, some people account for the most consistent and striking aspect of her work to be what critic Susan Sontag calls her , “emotional truthfulness.
Revised:  Being an enraged essay focusing on racism and the effects of colonialism, some people account for the most consistent and striking aspect of her work to be what critic Susan Sontag calls her "emotional truthfulness
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Original:  " Susan Sontag describes Kincaid's writing as "poignant, but it's poignant because it's so truthful and it's so complicated. ..
Revised:  " . Sontag describes Kincaid's writing as "poignant, but it's poignant because it's so truthful and it's so complicated. ..
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Original:   She doesn't treat these things in a sentimental or facile way."
Revised:  . She doesn't treat these things in a sentimental or facile way."
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Original:  Negative Reception Jane King, in A Small Place Writes Back, declared that “ Kincaid does not like the Caribbean very much, finds it dull and boring and would rather live in Vermont.
Revised:  Negative reception Jane King, in A Small Place Writes Back, declared that “ Kincaid does not like the Caribbean very much, finds it dull and boring and would rather live in Vermont.
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Original:  Negative Reception Jane King, in A Small Place Writes Back, declared that “ Kincaid does not like the Caribbean very much, finds it dull and boring and would rather live in Vermont.
Revised:  Negative Reception Jane King, in A Small Place Writes Back, declared that " Kincaid does not like the Caribbean very much, finds it dull and boring and would rather live in Vermont.
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Original:  ” Moira Ferguson, a feminist academic, argued that as “ an African-Caribbean writer Kincaid speaks to and from the position of the other.
Revised:  " Moira Ferguson, a feminist academic, argued that as “ an African-Caribbean writer Kincaid speaks to and from the position of the other.
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Original:  ” Moira Ferguson, a feminist academic, argued that as “ an African-Caribbean writer Kincaid speaks to and from the position of the other.
Revised:  ” Moira Ferguson, a feminist academic, argued that as " an African-Caribbean writer Kincaid speaks to and from the position of the other.
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Original: History and background In 1493 Christopher Columbus was on his second voyage when he spotted an island .
Revised: History and background In 1493 Christopher Columbus was on his second voyage .
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Original:  He named it Antigua after the saint Santa Maria de la Antigua  .
Revised:  He named it Antigua after the Santa Maria de la Antigua .
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Original:  This was the beginning of slavery on the island.
Revised:  Warner also introduced slavery to the island.
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Original:  In 1834 slavery was finally abolished, but their conditions only got worse with the “land shortages and the universal refusal of credit”.
Revised:  In 1834 slavery was finally abolished, but blacks' economic conditions failed to improve due to “land shortages and the universal refusal of credit”.
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Original:  Jamaica Kincaid 's novel can be seen as anti-imperialism because she brings up the issue of tourism and government corruption, both of which became prevalent after colonialism was abolished .
Revised:  Jamaica Kincaid 's novel can be seen as anti-imperialism because she brings up the issue of tourism and government corruption, both of which became prevalent after independence .
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Original:  A Small Place is a polemic, "an enraged essay about racism and corruption in Antigua . " 
Revised:  This social critique led to it being described as "an enraged essay about racism and corruption in Antigua . " 
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Original:  A Small Place is a polemic, "an enraged essay about racism and corruption in Antigua . " 
Revised:  A Small Place is a polemic, "an enraged essay about racism and corruption in Antigua " 
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Original:  "A Small Place: Some Perspectives on the Ordinary." Callaloo 25.3 (2002): 910-19. JSTOR.
Revised:  "A Small Place: Some Perspectives on the Ordinary." Callaloo 25.3 (2002): 910–19. JSTOR.
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Original:  Web. 2 December 2013.
Revised:  Web. 2013-12-02.
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Original:  Small Axe: A Caribbean Journal of Criticism 12.1 (2008): 77-92. Print.
Revised:  Small Axe: A Caribbean Journal of Criticism 12.1 (2008): 77–92. Print.
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Original:  According to Jamaica Kincaid: Writing Memory, Writing Back to the Mother she was not only banned unofficially for five years from her home country  but she voiced concerns that had she gone back in that time, she worried she would be killed.
Revised:  According to Jamaica Kincaid: Writing Memory, Writing Back to the Mother she was not only banned unofficially for five years from her home country , but she voiced concerns that had she gone back in that time, she worried she would be killed.
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Original:  Her characters are often maligned by history and subjected to a foreign culture, while Kincaid herself has become an increasingly mainstream American writer ”
Revised:  Her characters are often maligned by history and subjected to a foreign culture, while Kincaid herself has become an increasingly mainstream American writer ."
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Original:  Crashes The   overall risk of death from a cycling accident in developed countries has diminished over the last 25 years according to a 2017 analysis of OECD statistics.
Revised:  Crashes The The overall risk of death from a cycling accident in developed countries has diminished over the last 25 years according to a 2017 analysis of OECD statistics.
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Original:  A study conducted in 2000 by the Institute for Road Safety Research in the Netherlands found that single bicycle crashes accounted for 47\% of all bicycle crashes, collisions with obstacles and animals accounted for 12\%, and collisions with other road users accounted for 40\%, with the remaining 1\% having unknown or unclassified cause.
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Original:  Prospective studies estimate that less than 10\% of bicycle crashes are officially reported.
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Original:  In-depth Study of Motorcycle Accidents Even minor bicycle crashes not involving hospitalisation can incur significant costs for the cyclist and others .
Revised:  In-depth Study of Motorcycle Accidents Even minor bicycle crashes not involving hospitalisation can incur significant costs , and result in long-term effects .
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Original: Death and legacy 250px|House of Mostowfi in Tehran Mirza Hassan Mostowfi al Mamalek died of a heart attack on 27 August 1932.
Revised: Death and legacy Mirza Hassan Mostowfi al Mamalek died of a heart attack on 27 August 1932.
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Original: Company history DailyBurn was founded in 2007 by Andy Smith and Stephen Blankenship.
Revised: Company history Daily Burn was founded in 2007 by Andy Smith and Stephen Blankenship.
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Original:  DailyBurn was accepted into TechStars Boulder in the summer of 2008.
Revised:  Daily Burn was accepted into TechStars Boulder in the summer of 2008.
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Original:  In 2009, the site changed its name and URL from Gyminee to DailyBurn . IAC acquired a majority stake of DailyBurn in May 2010.
Revised:  In 2009, the site changed its name and URL from Gyminee to Daily Burn . IAC acquired a majority stake of DailyBurn in May 2010.
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Original:  In 2009, the site changed its name and URL from Gyminee to DailyBurn . IAC acquired a majority stake of DailyBurn in May 2010.
Revised:  In 2009, the site changed its name and URL from Gyminee to DailyBurn . IAC acquired a majority stake of Daily Burn in May 2010.
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Original:  DailyBurn 's first product, an exercise and nutrition tracking app, was rebranded as DailyBurn Tracker in December 2011 and the company's new streaming workout video app was given the name DailyBurn .
Revised:  Daily Burn 's first product, an exercise and nutrition tracking app, was rebranded as DailyBurn Tracker in December 2011 and the company's new streaming workout video app was given the name DailyBurn .
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Original:  DailyBurn 's first product, an exercise and nutrition tracking app, was rebranded as DailyBurn Tracker in December 2011 and the company's new streaming workout video app was given the name DailyBurn .
Revised:  DailyBurn 's first product, an exercise and nutrition tracking app, was rebranded as Daily Burn Tracker in December 2011 and the company's new streaming workout video app was given the name DailyBurn .
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Original:  DailyBurn 's first product, an exercise and nutrition tracking app, was rebranded as DailyBurn Tracker in December 2011 and the company's new streaming workout video app was given the name DailyBurn .
Revised:  DailyBurn 's first product, an exercise and nutrition tracking app, was rebranded as DailyBurn Tracker in December 2011 and the company's new streaming workout video app was given the name Daily Burn .
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Original: DailyBurn is a health and fitness company with a membership of approximately 2.5 million that provides workout and nutrition programs on a variety of web, mobile, and TV apps.
Revised: Daily Burn is a health and fitness company with a membership of approximately 2.5 million that provides workout and nutrition programs on a variety of web, mobile, and TV apps.
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Original:  DailyBurn streaming workout videos are led by master trainers and produced by Mason Bendewald, the director of Beachbody's P90X workout program.
Revised:  Daily Burn streaming workout videos are led by master trainers and produced by Mason Bendewald, the director of Beachbody's P90X workout program.
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Original: Production Some DailyBurn videos are directed and produced by Executive Producer Mason Bendewald.
Revised: Production Some Daily Burn videos are directed and produced by Executive Producer Mason Bendewald.
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Original:  The following trainers and health experts have appeared in DailyBurn videos:
Revised:  The following trainers and health experts have appeared in Daily Burn videos:
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Original: 1953 stamps of Northern Rhodesia .
Revised: 1953 stamps of Northern Rhodesia 
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Original:  A 1967 stamp of Zambia .
Revised:  A 1967 stamp of Zambia 
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Original: 1953 stamps of Northern Rhodesia A 1967 stamp of Zambia This is a survey of the postage stamps and postal history of Zambia, formerly known as Northern Rhodesia.
Revised:  A 1967 stamp of Zambia This is a survey of the postage stamps and postal history of Zambia, formerly known as Northern Rhodesia.
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Original:  Northern Rhodesia was created in 1911 from territory administered by the British South Africa Company , becoming an official British protectorate in 1924, and achieving independence as Zambia in 1964.
Revised:  British South Africa Company , becoming an official British protectorate in 1924, and achieving independence as Zambia in 1964.
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Original:  Northern Rhodesia was created in 1911 from territory administered by the British South Africa Company , becoming an official British protectorate in 1924, and achieving independence as Zambia in 1964.
Revised:  Northern Rhodesia was created in 1911 from territory administered by the British South Africa Company 
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Original:  The change to protectorate included a change of stamps, and on  1 April 1925, Northern Rhodesia issued its first stamps.
Revised:  The change to protectorate included a change of stamps, and on On 1 April 1925, Northern Rhodesia issued its first stamps.
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Original:  Only a few months later, these NR stamps were withdrawn, and Federation stamps were issued in their place, i.e. NR QEII stamps are relatively rare.
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Original:  Northern Rhodesia joined the Federation of Rhodesia and Nyasaland in 1953, and  used the Federation's stamps  until it was dissolved in 1963.
Revised:  Northern Rhodesia joined the Federation of Rhodesia and Nyasaland in 1953, and Northern Rhodesia used the Federation's stamps until it was dissolved in 1963.
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Original:  On 10 December 1963, a new definitive series depicted the Queen and the territory's arms , but these were withdrawn on 23 October 1964 when Zambia became independent.
Revised:  On 10 December 1963, a new definitive series depicted the Queen and the territory's arms were issued, but withdrawn on 23 October 1964 when Zambia became independent.
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Original:  Only a few months later, these stamps were withdrawn, and stamps of the Federation of Rhodesia and Nyasaland issued in their place , i. e. NR QEII stamps are relatively rare.
Revised:  Only a few months later, these stamps were withdrawn, and stamps of the Federation of Rhodesia and Nyasaland issued in their place .
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Original: Govindan Parameswaran Pillai, of Pallipuram (1864–1903), commonly known as Barrister G. P. Pillai, was born in Pallichal, Thiruvananthapuram, India, in an aristocratic Nair family.
Revised: Govindan Parameswaran Pillai, of Pallichal (1864–1903), commonly known as Barrister G. P. Pillai, was born in Pallichal, Thiruvananthapuram, India, in an aristocratic Nair family.
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Original: Govindan Parameswaran Pillai, of Pallichal (1864–1903), commonly known as Barrister G. P. Pillai, was born in Pallichal , Thiruvananthapuram, India, in an aristocratic Nair family.
Revised: Govindan Parameswaran Pillai, of Pallichal (1864–1903), commonly known as Barrister G. P. Pillai, was born in Pallippuram , Thiruvananthapuram, India, in an aristocratic Nair family.
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Original:  Govindan Parameswaran Pillai, of Pallichal (1864–1903), commonly known as Barrister G. P. Pillai, was born in Pallippuram, Thiruvananthapuram, India, in an aristocratic Nair family.
Revised: Gj Govindan Parameswaran Pillai, of Pallichal (1864–1903), commonly known as Barrister G. P. Pillai, was born in Pallippuram, Thiruvananthapuram, India, in an aristocratic Nair family.
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Original: Platonic love  (often lowercased as platonic love) is a type of love  that is not sexual.
Revised: Platonic love (often lowercased as platonic love) is a type of love sexe complication that is not sexual.
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Original:  These were: Eros  sexual or passionate love, or a modern perspective of romantic love.
Revised:  These were: Eros : sexual or passionate love, or a modern perspective of romantic love.
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Original:  Philia  the love of friendship or goodwill, often met with mutual benefits that can also be formed by companionship, dependability, and trust.
Revised:  Philia : the love of friendship or goodwill, often met with mutual benefits that can also be formed by companionship, dependability, and trust.
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Original:  Storge  the love found between parents and children, often a unilateral love.
Revised:  Storge : the love found between parents and children, often a unilateral love.
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Original:  Agape  the universal love, consisting of love for strangers, nature, or God.
Revised:  Agape : the universal love, consisting of love for strangers, nature, or God.
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Original:  Ludus  playful and uncommitted love, intended for fun with no resulting consequences.
Revised:  Ludus : playful and uncommitted love, intended for fun with no resulting consequences.
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Original:  Pragma  love founded on duty and reason, and one's longer-term interests.
Revised:  Pragma : love founded on duty and reason, and one's longer-term interests.
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Original:  Philautia  self-love, both healthy or unhealthy;
Revised:  Philautia : self-love, both healthy or unhealthy;
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Original: Samuel  Tremblay, better known by his stage name Samian (born 11 July 1983 in Pikogan, Quebec),Samian at the First Nations Youth Network. is a Canadian rapper who performs in both French and Algonquin.
Revised: Samuel Bruce Tremblay, better known by his stage name Samian (born 11 July 1983 in Pikogan, Quebec),Samian at the First Nations Youth Network. is a Canadian rapper who performs in both French and Algonquin.
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Original: Samuel Bruce Tremblay, better known by his stage name Samian (born 11 July 1983 in Pikogan, Quebec),Samian at the First Nations Youth Network. is a Canadian rapper who performs in both French and Algonquin.
Revised: Samuel Tremblay, better known by his stage name Samian (born 11 July 1983 in Pikogan, Quebec),Samian at the First Nations Youth Network. is a Canadian rapper who performs in both French and Algonquin.
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Original: In 2015 , he had an acting role in the film Scratch , and in 2017 he appeared in the film Hochelaga, Land of Souls . "Toronto Film Review: ‘Hochelaga, Land of Souls’".
Revised: He has also had acting roles in the films Scratch ( 2015 , he had an acting role in the film Scratch , and in 2017 he appeared in the film Hochelaga, Land of Souls . "Toronto Film Review: ‘Hochelaga, Land of Souls’".
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Original: In 2015 , he had an acting role in the film Scratch , and in 2017 he appeared in the film Hochelaga, Land of Souls . "Toronto Film Review: ‘Hochelaga, Land of Souls’".
Revised: In 2015 ), Hochelaga, Land of Souls . "Toronto Film Review: ‘Hochelaga, Land of Souls’".
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Original:  Oscillatory activity can also be used to control external devices in brain–computer interfaces , in which subjects can control an external device by changing the amplitude of particular brain rhythmics .
Revised:  Oscillatory activity can also be used to control external devices in brain–computer interfaces . .
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Original:  Oscillatory activity can also be used to control external devices in brain–computer interfaces. .
Revised:  Oscillatory activity can also be used to control external devices such as a brain–computer interfaces. .
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Original:  Oscillatory activity can also be used to control external devices in brain–computer interfaces. .
Revised:  Oscillatory activity can also be used to control external devices in brain–computer interface .
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Original: Beckfest Background The concept of neuronal ensemble dates back to the work of Charles Sherrington who described the functioning of the CNS as the system of reflex arcs, each composed of interconnected excitatory and inhibitory neurons.
Revised:  Background The concept of neuronal ensemble dates back to the work of Charles Sherrington who described the functioning of the CNS as the system of reflex arcs, each composed of interconnected excitatory and inhibitory neurons.
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Original:  Central pattern generations that reside in the spinal cord are more complex ensembles for coordination of limb movements during locomotion.
Revised:  Central pattern generators that reside in the spinal cord are more complex ensembles for coordination of limb movements during locomotion.
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Original:  For example, Georgopoulos'  population vector accurately described mental rotations made by the monkeys that were trained to translate locations of visual stimuli into spatially shifted locations of reach targets.
Revised:  For example, Georgopoulos' s population vector accurately described mental rotations made by the monkeys that were trained to translate locations of visual stimuli into spatially shifted locations of reach targets.
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