wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Notable people columns-list|colwidth=20em| Demetrius Andrade George Araujo Almir Barbosa Shauna Barbosa Anthony Barboza Cynthia Barboza Dana Barros Michael Beach Benzino Blu Cantrell Peter Cipriano Stephen Cooper Jasiel Correia Mike Costa John DeBrito Pedro DeBrito Vinny deMacedo Paulo Dos Santos Wuilito Fernandes Wayne Fontes Gordon D.
Revised: Notable people Demetrius Andrade George Araujo Almir Barbosa Shauna Barbosa Anthony Barboza Cynthia Barboza Dana Barros Michael Beach Benzino Blu Cantrell Peter Cipriano Stephen Cooper Jasiel Correia Mike Costa John DeBrito Pedro DeBrito Vinny deMacedo Paulo Dos Santos Wuilito Fernandes Wayne Fontes Gordon D.
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Original:  It differs from a fallout shelter, in that its main purpose is to protect from shock waves and overpressure , instead of from radioactive precipitation, as a fallout shelter does.
Revised:  It differs from a fallout shelter, in that its main purpose is to protect from shock waves and overpressure instead of from radioactive precipitation, as a fallout shelter does.
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Original: JPG|A blast door of a subway shelter in Singapore]] During World War II, people in London and Moscow survived bombing during the German Blitz by taking refuge in the undergrounds , e.g., the London underground .
Revised: JPG|A blast door of a subway shelter in Singapore]] During World War II, people in London and Moscow survived bombing during the German Blitz by taking refuge in the undergrounds , e.g., the London Underground .
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Original: A blast shelter is a place where people can go to protect themselves from bomb blasts .
Revised: A blast shelter is a place where people can go to protect themselves from blasts and explosions, like those from bombs, or in hazardous worksites, such as those in the oil and gas companies or petrochemical facilities .
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Original: A blast shelter is a place where people can go to protect themselves from blasts and explosions, like those from bombs, or in hazardous worksites, such as those in the oil and gas companies or petrochemical facilities.
Revised: A blast shelter is a place where people can go to protect themselves from blasts and explosions, like those from bombs, or in hazardous worksites, such as on oil and gas companies or petrochemical facilities.
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Original: A blast shelter is a place where people can go to protect themselves from blasts and explosions, like those from bombs, or in hazardous worksites, such as those in the oil and gas companies or petrochemical facilities.
Revised: A blast shelter is a place where people can go to protect themselves from blasts and explosions, like those from bombs, or in hazardous worksites, such as those in the oil and gas refineries or petrochemical facilities.
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Original:  A blast shelter is a place where people can go to protect themselves from blasts and explosions, like those from bombs, or in hazardous worksites, such as on oil and gas refineries or petrochemical facilities.
Revised: ~ A blast shelter is a place where people can go to protect themselves from blasts and explosions, like those from bombs, or in hazardous worksites, such as on oil and gas refineries or petrochemical facilities.
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Original: Born in Gueydan, Louisiana on October 18, 1949, Guidry (who referred to himself as “Le gros Cadien," or The Big Cajun) attended the University of Southwestern Louisiana (now the University of Louisiana at Lafayette), where he obtained a bachelor's degree in French and Spanish, and a master's degree in French Education.
Revised: Born in Gueyden, Lousiana, on October 18, 1949, Guidry (who referred to himself as “Le gros Cadien," or The Big Cajun) attended the University of Southwestern Louisiana (now the University of Louisiana at Lafayette), where he obtained a bachelor's degree in French and Spanish, and a master's degree in French Education.
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Original:  Obituary, Lafayette, La., Daily Advertiser, 1 August 2008.
Revised:  Obituary, Lafayette, La., Daily Advertiser, August 1, 2008.
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Original: For the Louisiana former state representative from Lafourche Parish, see Dick Guidry.
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Original: Also, women are more prone to trust their feelings and intuition, in contrast to men.
Revised: Women are more prone to trust their feelings and intuition, in contrast to men.
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Original: In addition, studies have also found that pairing the word ‘I’ with positive traits heightens implicit self-esteem regardless of the level of temporal self-esteem prior to the conditioning process.
Revised: In addition, studies have also found that pairing the word 'I' with positive traits heightens implicit self-esteem regardless of the level of temporal self-esteem prior to the conditioning process.
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Original:  then people who are in touch with their feelings , would report to have higher explicit self-esteem scores , which are consistent to implicit self-esteem scores.
Revised:  which explains that people who are in touch with their feelings , would report to have higher explicit self-esteem scores , which are consistent to implicit self-esteem scores.
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Original:  then people who are in touch with their feelings , would report to have higher explicit self-esteem scores , which are consistent to implicit self-esteem scores.
Revised:  then people who are in touch with their feelings would report to have higher explicit self-esteem scores , which are consistent to implicit self-esteem scores.
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Original:   Multibeam systems acquire both bathymetry (depth) and backscatter (intensity) data , with full bottom coverage possible .
Revised:  Multibeam systems acquire both bathymetry (depth) and backscatter (intensity) data .
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Original:  This has allowed multibeam backscatter data to be of a quality comparable to that of sidescan sonar imagery.
Revised:  These advances have allowed some multibeam backscatter data to be of a quality comparable to that of sidescan sonar imagery.
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Original:  This has allowed multibeam backscatter data to be of a quality comparable to that of sidescan sonar imagery.
Revised:  This has allowed multibeam backscatter data to achieve a quality comparable to that of sidescan sonar imagery.
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Original:  and others such as angular response characterization (Hughes-Clarke et al., 1997).
Revised:  and other methods, such as angular response characterization (Hughes-Clarke et al., 1997).
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Original:  One well established approach is to adapt image processing methods traditionally used in satellite remote sensing  to quantitatively analyze the multibeam backscatter intensity data.
Revised:  Image processing methods traditionally used in satellite remote sensing to quantitatively analyze the multibeam backscatter intensity data.
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Original:  One well established approach is to adapt image processing methods traditionally used in satellite remote sensing  to quantitatively analyze the multibeam backscatter intensity data.
Revised:  One well established approach is to adapt image processing methods traditionally used in satellite remote sensing to quantitatively analyze multibeam backscatter intensity data.
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Original:  A fundamental point to note when using any classification method is that, no classification map is 100\% accurate and some attempt must always be made to assess the accuracy  (e.g. confusion matrix).
Revised:  No classification method produces a map that is 100\% accurate and some attempt must always be made to assess the accuracy (e.g. confusion matrix).
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Original:  A fundamental point to note when using any classification method is that, no classification map is 100\% accurate and some attempt must always be made to assess the accuracy  (e.g. confusion matrix).
Revised:  A fundamental point to note when using any classification method is that, no classification map is 100\% accurate and some attempt must always be made to assess the accuracy of classification results (e.g. confusion matrix).
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Original:  The classification map needs to be subject to ground-verification in order to identify the class compositions and bottom type  .
Revised:  Seabed characterization Classification maps are subject to ground-verification in order to identify the class compositions and bottom type .
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Original:  The classification map needs to be subject to ground-verification in order to identify the class compositions and bottom type  .
Revised:  The classification map needs to be subject to ground-verification in order to identify the compositions and bottom type .
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Original:  The functionality of Geographic Information Systems (GIS) can be used to integrate data from different sources, for example, integrating with ground truth data.
Revised:  The functionality of Geographic Information Systems (GIS) can be used to integrate data from different sources, including ground truth data.
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Original:  This includes in-situ sediment grab sampling, the use of a dredge, trawl net, visual imagery or surveys using Remotely Operated Vehicles (ROVs).
Revised:  Such data may come from in-situ sediment grab sampling, the use of a dredge, trawl net, visual imagery or surveys using Remotely Operated Vehicles (ROVs).
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Original:  The seabed classification map can be combined with other acoustically (or other method) derived information about the area, such as fish distribution and abundance or vegetation characteristics, to establish habitat groups based on the associations.
Revised:  The seabed classification map can be combined with other information about the area, such as fish distribution and abundance or vegetation characteristics, to establish habitat groups based on the associations.
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Original:  The seabed classification map can be combined with other acoustically (or other method) derived information about the area, such as fish distribution and abundance or vegetation characteristics, to establish habitat groups based on the associations.
Revised:  The seabed classification map can be combined with other acoustically (or other method) derived information about the area, such as fish distribution and abundance or vegetation characteristics, to establish habitat groups based on associations.
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Original:  This  allows classification maps derived from multibeam data to help characterize the seabed and more effectively manage its use.
Revised:  This process allows classification maps derived from multibeam data to help characterize the seabed and more effectively manage its use.
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Original:  Sub-surface seabed classification  is commonly referred to as sub-bottom profiling and is generally used for geological assessment of the sub-surface characteristics , down to hundreds of meters , as necessary in the exploration for oil deposits .
Revised:  Sub-surface seabed classification Sub-surface seabed classification is commonly referred to as sub-bottom profiling and is generally used for geological assessment of the sub-surface characteristics , down to hundreds of meters , as necessary in the exploration for oil deposits .
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Original:  Sub-surface seabed classification  is commonly referred to as sub-bottom profiling and is generally used for geological assessment of the sub-surface characteristics , down to hundreds of meters , as necessary in the exploration for oil deposits .
Revised:  Sub-surface seabed classification is commonly referred to as sub-bottom profiling and is generally used for geological assessment of the sub-surface characteristics . Sub-bottom profiling can return information from tens to hundreds of meters , as necessary in the exploration for oil deposits .
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Original:  RADIOMETRIC CALIBRATION OF AIRBORNE LIDAR INTENSITY DATA FOR LAND COVER CLASSIFICATION by Wai Yeung Yan & Ahmed Shaker Nevertheless, acoustics remain the preferred method of imaging the seafloor because data can be acquired over a much larger area (than in-situ sampling) from almost any depth.
Revised:  Radiometric Calibration of Airborne LIDAR Intensity Data for Land Cover Classification, by Wai Yeung Yan & Ahmed Shaker Nevertheless, acoustics remain the preferred method of imaging the seafloor because data can be acquired over a much larger area (than in-situ sampling) from almost any depth.
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Original:  However, after orbiting the Moon Zond 6 crashed on its return to Earth due to a parachute failure.
Revised:  However, after rounding the Moon, Zond 6 crashed on its return to Earth due to a parachute failure.
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Original:  However, only one negative was recovered from the camera container.
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Original:  While this was successful in raising the temperature of the tanks it also damage the seal around the door of the re-entry capsule resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the capsule falling.
Revised:  While this was successful in raising the temperature of the tanks it also damage the seal around the door of the re-entry cabin resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the capsule falling.
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Original:  While this was successful in raising the temperature of the tanks it also damage the seal around the door of the re-entry capsule resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the capsule falling.
Revised:  While this was successful in raising the temperature of the tanks it also damage the seal around the door of the re-entry capsule resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the cabin falling.
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Original:   Zond 6's parachutes also deployed too early and it crashed in Kazakhstan, near the designated landing area.
Revised:  A further problem resulted in Zond 6's parachutes also deployed too early and it crashed in Kazakhstan, near the designated landing area.
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Original:  For propaganda reasons the Soviets claimed the flight was a success.
Revised:  Investigation of the remains was delayed while the spacecraft's self destruct system was located and removed. Once this had been done the craft's film magazines were recovered and the images therein were published along with claims that the mission had been entirely successful.
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Original: Zond 6 , a formal member of the Soviet Zond program and unmanned version of  Soyuz 7K-L1 manned Moon-flyby spacecraft , was launched on a lunar flyby mission from a parent satellite (68-101B) in Earth parking orbit.
Revised: Zond 6 was a formal member of the Soviet Zond program and unmanned version of Soyuz 7K-L1 manned Moon-flyby spacecraft , was launched on a lunar flyby mission from a parent satellite (68-101B) in Earth parking orbit.
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Original: Zond 6 , a formal member of the Soviet Zond program and unmanned version of  Soyuz 7K-L1 manned Moon-flyby spacecraft , was launched on a lunar flyby mission from a parent satellite (68-101B) in Earth parking orbit.
Revised: Zond 6 , a formal member of the Soviet Zond program , and an unmanned version of Soyuz 7K-L1 manned Moon-flyby spacecraft , was launched on a lunar flyby mission from a parent satellite (68-101B) in Earth parking orbit.
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Original: Zond 6 , a formal member of the Soviet Zond program and unmanned version of  Soyuz 7K-L1 manned Moon-flyby spacecraft , was launched on a lunar flyby mission from a parent satellite (68-101B) in Earth parking orbit.
Revised: Zond 6 , a formal member of the Soviet Zond program and unmanned version of the Soyuz 7K-L1 manned Moon-flyby spacecraft , was launched on a lunar flyby mission from a parent satellite (68-101B) in Earth parking orbit.
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Original: Zond 6 , a formal member of the Soviet Zond program and unmanned version of  Soyuz 7K-L1 manned Moon-flyby spacecraft , was launched on a lunar flyby mission from a parent satellite (68-101B) in Earth parking orbit.
Revised: Zond 6 , a formal member of the Soviet Zond program and unmanned version of Soyuz 7K-L1 manned Moon-flyby spacecraft . It was launched on a lunar flyby mission from a parent satellite (68-101B) in Earth parking orbit.
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Original:  The spacecraft , which carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, photography equipment , and a biological payload ( flies, bacteria and turtles ), was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968,  beating the American Apollo 8.
Revised:  The spacecraft carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, photography equipment , and a biological payload ( flies, bacteria and turtles ), was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968, beating the American Apollo 8.
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Original:  The spacecraft , which carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, photography equipment , and a biological payload ( flies, bacteria and turtles ), was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968,  beating the American Apollo 8.
Revised:  The spacecraft , which carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, as well as photographic equipment and a biological payload ( flies, bacteria and turtles ), was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968, beating the American Apollo 8.
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Original:  The spacecraft , which carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, photography equipment , and a biological payload ( flies, bacteria and turtles ), was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968,  beating the American Apollo 8.
Revised:  The spacecraft , which carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, photography equipment , and a biological payload of flies, bacteria and turtles ), was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968, beating the American Apollo 8.
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Original:  The spacecraft , which carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, photography equipment , and a biological payload ( flies, bacteria and turtles ), was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968,  beating the American Apollo 8.
Revised:  The spacecraft , which carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, photography equipment , and a biological payload ( flies, bacteria and turtles . The mission was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968, beating the American Apollo 8.
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Original:  The spacecraft , which carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, photography equipment , and a biological payload ( flies, bacteria and turtles ), was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968,  beating the American Apollo 8.
Revised:  The spacecraft , which carried scientific probes including cosmic ray and micrometeoroid detectors, photography equipment , and a biological payload ( flies, bacteria and turtles ), was a precursor to a manned circumlunar flight which the Soviets hoped could occur in December 1968, thus beating the American Apollo 8.
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Original:  However, after rounding the Moon, Zond 6 crashed on its return to Earth  due to a parachute failure.
Revised:  However, after rounding the Moon, Zond 6 crashed on its return to Earth , due to a parachute failure.
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Original:  It was supposed to photograph the Moon in colour and in black and white from 8000 km and 2600 km ranges, then return to Earth, landing at Tyuratam  only 16 km from the launch pad.
Revised:  It was supposed to photograph the Moon in colour and in black and white from 8000 km and 2600 km ranges, then return to Earth, landing at Tyuratam , only 16 km from the launch pad.
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Original:  The flight was tracked by Jodrell Bank Observatory  which picked up telemetry data but also voice transmissions(which were either from a tape recorded or being relayed through the probe ).
Revised:  The flight was tracked by Jodrell Bank Observatory , which picked up telemetry data but also voice transmissions(which were either from a tape recorded or being relayed through the probe ).
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Original:  The flight was tracked by Jodrell Bank Observatory  which picked up telemetry data but also voice transmissions(which were either from a tape recorded or being relayed through the probe ).
Revised:  The flight was tracked by Jodrell Bank Observatory which picked up telemetry data but also voice transmissions(which were either from a tape recorder or being relayed through the probe ).
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Original:  In 2018  a recording of the signals was found in Jodrell Bank’s archive.
Revised:  In 2018 , a recording of the signals was found in Jodrell Bank’s archive.
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Original:  During the craft's return from the moon worries arose thew falling temperature of the craft's hydrogen peroxide tanks.
Revised:  During the craft's return from the moon , concerns arose about the falling temperatures of the hydrogen peroxide tanks.
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Original:  While this was successful in raising the temperature of the tanks it also damage the seal around the door of the re-entry cabin  resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the cabin falling.
Revised:  While this was successful in raising the temperatures of the tanks it also damage the seal around the door of the re-entry cabin resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the cabin falling.
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Original:  While this was successful in raising the temperature of the tanks it also damage the seal around the door of the re-entry cabin  resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the cabin falling.
Revised:  While this was successful in raising the temperature of the tanks , it also damaged the seal around the door of the re-entry cabin resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the cabin falling.
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Original:  While this was successful in raising the temperature of the tanks it also damage the seal around the door of the re-entry cabin  resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the cabin falling.
Revised:  While this was successful in raising the temperature of the tanks it also damage the seal around the door of the re-entry cabin , resulting in the spacecraft starting to leak and the pressure in the cabin falling.
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Original:  A further problem resulted in Zond 6's parachutes ejecting while the cabin was still several miles up and it crashed in Kazakhstan, near the designated landing area.
Revised:  A further problem resulted in Zond 6's parachutes ejecting while the cabin was still several miles up . The craft crashed in Kazakhstan, near the designated landing area.
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Original:  Investigation of the remains  was delayed while the spacecraft's self destruct system was located and removed.
Revised:  Investigation of the remains of the spacecraft was delayed while the spacecraft's self destruct system was located and removed.
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Original:  Investigation of the remains  was delayed while the spacecraft's self destruct system was located and removed.
Revised:  Investigation of the remains was delayed while the self destruct system was located and removed.
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