wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert  son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and  his third wife  Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
Revised:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and his third wife Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
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Original:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert  son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and  his third wife  Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
Revised:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and his third wife Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
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Original:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert  son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and  his third wife  Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
Revised:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" McLish. His father James Isaac Colbert son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and his third wife Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
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Original:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert  son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and  his third wife  Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
Revised:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert , the son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and his third wife Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
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Original:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert  son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and  his third wife  Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
Revised:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert , already had some remote Chickasaw blood since he was the grandson of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and his third wife Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
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Original:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert  son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and  his third wife  Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
Revised:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and of his third wife Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
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Original:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert  son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and  his third wife  Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
Revised:  Colbert served as the tribe's delegate to Washington, DC after the American Civil War . Early life and education Holmes Colbert was of , the son of James Isaac Colbert and Sarah "Sally" .McLish James Isaac Colbert son of Maj. James Holmes Colbert son of James Logan Colbert, a Scots trader from North Carolina who settled in Chickasaw country in the mid-18th century, and his third wife , Minta Hoye, who had a Chickasaw mother ;
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Original:  Because the Chickasaw have a matrilineal system, children are considered born into their mother's clan and they gain status in the tribe through her people , including any hereditary leadership positions .
Revised:  Because the Chickasaw have a matrilineal system, children are considered born into their mother's clan and gain recognition in the tribe through her people , including any hereditary leadership positions .
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Original:  Because the Chickasaw have a matrilineal system, children are considered born into their mother's clan and they gain status in the tribe through her people , including any hereditary leadership positions .
Revised:  Because the Chickasaw have a matrilineal system, children are considered born into their mother's clan and they gain status in the tribe through her legacy , including any hereditary leadership positions .
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Original:  The status of their mothers, combined with their father' s access to trade goods, led to the Colbert men becoming prominent landowners and leaders in the Chickasaw nation.
Revised:  The status of their mothers, combined with their fathers' access to trade goods, led to the Colbert men becoming prominent landowners and leaders in the Chickasaw nation.
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Original:  The status of their mothers, combined with their father' s access to trade goods, led to the Colbert men becoming prominent landowners and leaders in the Chickasaw nation.
Revised:  The status of their mothers, combined with their father' s access to trade goods, led the male members of the family to become prominent landowners and leaders in the Chickasaw nation.
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Original:  The status of their mothers, combined with their father' s access to trade goods, led to the Colbert men becoming prominent landowners and leaders in the Chickasaw nation.
Revised:  The status of their mothers, combined with their father' s access to trade goods, led to the Colbert men becoming prominent landowners and leaders within the Chickasaw Nation
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Original:  "George Colbert", Oklahoma Encyclopedia of History and Culture, accessed 3 Nov 2009 Colberts' leadership contributions The Colbert sons were William, George, Levi, Samuel, Joseph, and Pittman (or James).
Revised:  "George Colbert", Oklahoma Encyclopedia of History and Culture, accessed 3 Nov 2009 Colberts' leadership contributions Historical records indicate that Holmes had six sons going by the names of William, George, Levi, Samuel, Joseph, and Pittman (or James).
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Original:  For nearly a century, the Colbert men and their descendants provided critical leadership during the Chickasaw tribe's greatest challenges. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Chickasaw allied with the United States during the War of 1812.
Revised:  For nearly a century, the Colberts and their male descendants provided critical leadership during the Chickasaw tribe's greatest challenges. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Chickasaw allied with the United States during the War of 1812.
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Original:  For nearly a century, the Colbert men and their descendants provided critical leadership during the Chickasaw tribe's greatest challenges. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Chickasaw allied with the United States during the War of 1812.
Revised:  For nearly a century, the Colbert men and their descendants provided critical leadership as the Chickasaw faced their greatest challenges. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Chickasaw allied with the United States during the War of 1812.
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Original:  William Colbert served with General Andrew Jackson against the Red Sticks during the Creek Wars of 1813-14, a civil war within the nation which became part of that conflict.
Revised:  William Colbert served under General Andrew Jackson against the Red Sticks during the Creek Wars of 1813-14, a civil war within the nation which became part of that conflict.
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Original:  The brothers were prominent landowners and a political force within their clan and the Chickasaw Nation . George and Levi Colbert served as negotiators and interpreters in the 1820s-1830 during the tribe's negotiations with the US government related to Indian Removal.
Revised:  The brothers were prominent landowners and a political force to be reckoned with . George and Levi Colbert served as negotiators and interpreters in the 1820s-1830 during the tribe's negotiations with the US government related to Indian Removal.
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Original:  Political career Holmes grew up learning about his family's leadership and was groomed to take his part in tribal affairs in his turn .
Revised:  Political career Holmes grew up learning about his family's leadership and was groomed for taking responsibilities in tribal affairs in his turn .
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Original:  Political career Holmes grew up learning about his family's leadership and was groomed to take his part in tribal affairs in his turn .
Revised:  Political career Holmes grew up learning about his family's leadership and was groomed to take his part in tribal affairs .
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Original:  In the 1850s, Holmes Colbert helped write the constitution for their government . Marriage and children {{ Colbert married Elizabeth Betsy Love, daughter of Henry W Love wife Sarah Ann Moore.
Revised:  In the 1850s, Holmes Colbert helped write the constitution for their government . Marriage and children {{ Colbert married Elizabeth Betsy Love, daughter of Henry W . Love and his wife Sarah Ann Moore.
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Original: "Polly Colbert", T. Lindsay Baker, The WPA Oklahoma Slave Narratives, US Work Projects Administration, p. 90, accessed 3 Nov 2009 Their mothers' clans were influential families in the Chickasaw Nation who were grooming their children for the future and believed they needed education to deal with European Americans .
Revised: "Polly Colbert", T. Lindsay Baker, The WPA Oklahoma Slave Narratives, US Work Projects Administration, p. 90, accessed 3 Nov 2009 Their mothers' clans were influential families in the Chickasaw Nation who were grooming their children for the future and believed they needed education to deal with European-Americans .
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Original: Marriage and children cleanup section Colbert married Elizabeth Betsy Love, daughter of Henry W. Love and his wife Sarah Ann Moore.
Revised: Marriage and children Colbert married Elizabeth Betsy Love, daughter of Henry W. Love and his wife Sarah Ann Moore.
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Original:  One the leaders of the cavalry was the the lawyer Benito Suárez de Carbajal.
Revised:  One the leaders of the cavalry was Benito Suárez de Carbajal.
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Original:  Some said that this was to avoid enemy fire, and others said that it was to fight with more humility, as one of the soldiers       .
Revised:  Some said that this was to avoid enemy fire, and others said that it was to fight with more humility, as one of the soldiers . .
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Original:  The encomenderos (the masters) protested and organized a rebellion, choosing Gonzalo Pizarro " as leader, who was then a wealthy encomendero in Charcas (present-day Bolivia) With their leaders dead, the viceroy's infantry crumbled.
Revised:  The encomenderos (the masters) protested and organized a rebellion, choosing Gonzalo Pizarro as leader, who was then a wealthy encomendero in Charcas (present-day Bolivia) With their leaders dead, the viceroy's infantry crumbled.
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Original:  The viceroy, who valiantly fought in the the left flank, was finally reached by a blow from Hernando de Torres (a resident of Arequipa), receiving a mortal wound in the head.
Revised:  The viceroy, who valiantly fought in the left flank, was finally reached by a blow from Hernando de Torres (a resident of Arequipa), receiving a mortal wound in the head.
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Original: The TWUA sent union organizer Eli Zivkovich to unionize J. P. Stevens & Company's Roanoke Rapids mills employees and worked with Sutton.
Revised: The Textile Workers Union of America sent union organizer Eli Zivkovich to unionize J. P. Stevens & Company's Roanoke Rapids mills employees and worked with Sutton.
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Original:  Thanks to a coalition of African American and white women employees of the mill, Sutton's national speaking tour, and local organizing on behalf of workers among religious groups, J. P. Stevens and ACTWU agreed to a settlement in 1980.
Revised:  Thanks to a coalition of black and white women employees of the mill, Sutton's national speaking tour, and local organizing on behalf of workers among religious groups, J. P. Stevens and ACTWU agreed to a settlement in 1980.
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Original:  In 1973 Crystal saw a union poster hanging in one of the seven mills in Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina owned by J. P. Stevens & Company mills where three generations of her family had worked—living in a neighbourhood where the Company "owned every shotgun house" in Sutton's neighborhood.
Revised:  In 1973 Crystal saw a union poster hanging in one of the seven mills in Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina owned by J. P. Stevens & Company mills where three generations of her family had worked—living in a neighborhood where the Company "owned every shotgun house" in Sutton's neighborhood.
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Original:  Shortly after, by August 28, 1978  Amalgamated Clothing and Textile Workers Union (ACTWU) began to represent workers at the plant.
Revised:  Shortly after, by August 28, 1978 , Amalgamated Clothing and Textile Workers Union (ACTWU) began to represent workers at the plant.
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Original:  December 31, 1940 – September 11, 2009) was an American union organizer and advocate who gained fame in 1979 when the film Norma Rae was released, based on events related to her being fired from her job at the J.P. Stevens plant in Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina , on May 30, 1973 , for "insubordination" after she copied an anti-union letter posted on the company bulletin board.
Revised:  December 31, 1940 – September 11, 2009) was an American union organizer and advocate who gained fame in 1979 when the film Norma Rae was released, based on events related to her being fired from her job at the J.P. Stevens plant in Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina on May 30, 1973 , for "insubordination" after she copied an anti-union letter posted on the company bulletin board.
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Original:  December 31, 1940 – September 11, 2009) was an American union organizer and advocate who gained fame in 1979 when the film Norma Rae was released, based on events related to her being fired from her job at the J.P. Stevens plant in Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina , on May 30, 1973 , for "insubordination" after she copied an anti-union letter posted on the company bulletin board.
Revised:  December 31, 1940 – September 11, 2009) was an American union organizer and advocate who gained fame in 1979 when the film Norma Rae was released, based on events related to her being fired from her job at the J.P. Stevens plant in Roanoke Rapids, North Carolina , on May 30, 1973 for "insubordination" after she copied an anti-union letter posted on the company bulletin board.
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Original:  She had already been "thinking about the paltry wages, the bone-tiring work and the stingy benefits that she and her parents had suffered.
Revised:  She had been "thinking about the paltry wages, the bone-tiring work and the stingy benefits that she and her parents had suffered.
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Original: Indeed, Khaz’al actively fostered close relations with Britain in an attempt to gain their assurance that in the event of the Qajar Empire collapsing or being overthrown, Arabistan would be formally recognised by Britain as an independent state with him as its ruler.
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Original:      Rise to power After Jabir's death in 1881, his elder son, Maz'al, took over as tribal leader and Sheikh of Mohammerah, as well as the provincial governor-general, which was confirmed by an Imperial firman (executive order).
Revised:  Of these factions, the Muhaisin clan, led by Haji Jabir Khan Ibn Merdaw, became the strongest and under his leadership the Bani Kaab were reunified under a single authority, the capital of Arabistan being moved from the village of Fallahiyah to the flourishing port city of Mohammerah. Unlike previous rulers of Arabistan, Jabir maintained law and order, and established Mohammerah as a free port and sheikhdom, of which he was Sheikh. Jabir also became the Imperial-appointed governor-general of the province. Rise to power After Jabir's death in 1881, his elder son, Maz'al, took over as tribal leader and Sheikh of Mohammerah, as well as the provincial governor-general, which was confirmed by an Imperial firman (executive order).
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Original: ..the grace of this great and generous Arab King". </blockquote> King Faisal I attempts to kidnap Sheikh Khaz’al from Tehran 311x311px|Sheikh Khaz'al and King Faisal I in Basra The first of a number of attempts to rescue Khaz’al was in 1927 by King Faisal I of Iraq.
Revised: ..the grace of this great and generous Arab King". King Faisal I attempts to kidnap Sheikh Khaz’al from Tehran 311x311px|Sheikh Khaz'al and King Faisal I in Basra The first of a number of attempts to rescue Khaz’al was in 1927 by King Faisal I of Iraq.
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Original:  The emirate, although within the Persian Empire , was autonomous and allowed to conduct its own affairs.
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Original:  The emirate, although within the Persia , was autonomous and allowed to conduct its own affairs.
Revised:  The emirate, although within the Persian Empire , was autonomous and allowed to conduct its own affairs.
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Original:  His most successful film was Armaan in 1966, in which he played a supporting role with Waheed URL Review of film Armaan (1966) on Dawn newspaper, Published 14 March 2010, Retrieved 29 July URL Profile of comedian Nirala, Retrieved 29 July URL Profile of comedian Nirala, Retrieved 29 July 2016 Syed Muzaffar Husain Zaidi was renowned for his jokes and gimmicks since his earlier days.
Revised:  His most successful film was Armaan in 1966, in which he played a supporting role with Waheed URL Review of film Armaan (1966) on Dawn newspaper, Published 14 March 2010, Retrieved 29 July URL Profile of comedian Nirala, Retrieved 29 July 2016 Syed Muzaffar Husain Zaidi was renowned for his jokes and gimmicks since his earlier days.
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Original:  Nirala's last film was Choroan ka badshah, which was released three years after his URL Awards 1966- Nigar Award for Best Comedian for the film, URL Nirala's Best Comedian Award info listed on janubaba.com website, Retrieved 29 July 201
Revised:  Nirala's last film was Choroan ka badshah, which was released three years after his death. Awards 1966- Nigar Award for Best Comedian for the film, URL Nirala's Best Comedian Award info listed on janubaba.com website, Retrieved 29 July 201
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Original:  His most successful film was Armaan in 1966, in which he played a supporting role with Waheed URL Review of film Armaan (1966) on Dawn newspaper, Published 14 March 2010, Retrieved 29 July URL Profile of comedian Nirala, Retrieved 29 July 2016
Revised:  His most successful film was Armaan in 1966, in which he played a supporting role with Waheed URL Profile of comedian Nirala, Retrieved 29 July 2016
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Original:  His most successful film was Armaan in 1966, in which he played a supporting role with Waheed URL Profile of comedian Nirala , Retrieved 29 July 2016 Syed Muzaffar Husain Zaidi was renowned for his jokes and gimmicks since his earlier days.
Revised:  His most successful film was Armaan in 1966, in which he played a supporting role with Waheed URL Profile of comedian Nirala , Retrieved 29 July 2016 Syed Muzaffar Husain Zaidi was known for his jokes and gimmicks since his earlier days.
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Original:  In that function , he entertained the public with his comedy.
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Original:  A year later, Syed Muzaffar Husain Zaidi changed his name to Nirala and debuted in the 1960 film Aur bhi gham hain , producer, Danish Dairwee, director, A.H. Siddiqui.
Revised:  A year later, Syed Muzaffar Husain Zaidi took the professional name Nirala and debuted in the 1960 film Aur bhi gham hain , producer, Danish Dairwee, director, A.H. Siddiqui.
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Original:  A year later, Syed Muzaffar Husain Zaidi changed his name to Nirala and debuted in the 1960 film Aur bhi gham hain , producer, Danish Dairwee, director, A.H. Siddiqui.
Revised:  A year later, Syed Muzaffar Husain Zaidi changed his name to Nirala and debuted in the 1960 film Aur Bhi Gham Hain , producer, Danish Dairwee, director, A.H. Siddiqui.
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Original:  Nirala's last film was Choroan ka badshah  , which was released three years after his death.
Revised:  Nirala's last film was Choroan ka badshah '' , which was released three years after his death.
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Original:  Awards 1966- Nigar Award for Best Comedian for the film, Armaan 
Revised:  Awards Nigar Award for Best Comedian for the film, Armaan 
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Original:  Filmography Aur Bhi Gham Hain (1960) Heera Aur Pathar (1964 film) Armaan (1966 film) Ehsaan (1967 film)  Stage plays  Bakra Qiston Per with comedian Umer Sharif Death In the 1980s, Nirala moved to Karachi and made stage appearances with comedian Umer Sharif.
Revised:  Filmography Aur Bhi Gham Hain (1960) Heera Aur Pathar (1964 film) Armaan (1966 film) Ehsaan (1967 film) Stage plays '' Bakra Qiston Per with comedian Umer Sharif Death In the 1980s, Nirala moved to Karachi and made stage appearances with comedian Umer Sharif.
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