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Original: Wei Zhongping and Liu Ping received a prison sentence of six-and-a-half years under charges of "using evil religion to sabotage law enforcement" and "picking fights and provoking trouble" , while a third activist Li Sihua was convicted of only the last charge.
Revised: Wei Zhongping and Liu Ping received a prison sentence of six-and-a-half years under charges of "using evil religion to sabotage law enforcement" and "picking fights and provoking trouble" , while a third activist Li Sihua was also convicted for the last charge.
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Original:  Zhou Ze, Li’s Lawyer, told the AFP that they had the possibility to appeal the charges , but felt that it was pointless because “The ruling in an appeal is already decided.”
Revised:  Zhou Ze, Li’s Lawyer, told the AFP that an opportunity to appeal the charges , but felt that it was pointless because “The ruling in an appeal is already decided.”
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Original:  Zhou Ze, Li’s Lawyer, told the AFP that they had the possibility to appeal the charges , but felt that it was pointless because “The ruling in an appeal is already decided.”
Revised:  Zhou Ze, Li’s Lawyer, told the AFP that they had the possibility to appeal the charges had been discarded as pointless as “The ruling in an appeal is already decided.”
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Original:  The three were put on trial at a high security court late last year making their defence lawyers concerned about serious procedural problems surrounding the trial, according to the BBC . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping  launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption since his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
Revised:  The accused were trialed at a high security court late last year making their defence lawyers concerned about serious procedural problems surrounding the trial, according to the BBC . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption since his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
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Original:  The three were put on trial at a high security court late last year making their defence lawyers concerned about serious procedural problems surrounding the trial, according to the BBC . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping  launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption since his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
Revised:  The three were put on trial at a high security court late last year where, according to the BBC, their lawyers were concerned about serious procedural problems surrounding the trial, according to the BBC . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption since his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
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Original:  The three were put on trial at a high security court late last year making their defence lawyers concerned about serious procedural problems surrounding the trial, according to the BBC . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping  launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption since his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
Revised:  The three were put on trial at a high security court late last year making their defence lawyers concerned about serious procedural problems . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption since his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
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Original:  The three were put on trial at a high security court late last year making their defence lawyers concerned about serious procedural problems surrounding the trial, according to the BBC . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping  launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption since his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
Revised:  The three were put on trial at a high security court late last year making their defence lawyers concerned about serious procedural problems surrounding the trial, according to the BBC . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping , launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption since his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
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Original:  The three were put on trial at a high security court late last year making their defence lawyers concerned about serious procedural problems surrounding the trial, according to the BBC . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping  launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption since his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
Revised:  The three were put on trial at a high security court late last year making their defence lawyers concerned about serious procedural problems surrounding the trial, according to the BBC . Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption after his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
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Original:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
Revised:  Party leaders have sought to rid the government of corruption facing concerns that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
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Original:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
Revised:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
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Original:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
Revised:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four-year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
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Original:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
Revised:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April . Several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
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Original:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
Revised:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants will also serve jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
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Original:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for the same charge of disrupting the public order
Revised:  Many Party leaders are concerned that the widespread organisation of protests may lead to a looser grip on political control , so have sought out to rid the government of official corruption . Xu Zhiyong, a founder of the New Citizens Movement, was sentenced to a four year jail sentence in April , and several other Beijing-based participants also jail terms for disrupting the public order
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Original:  The accused were trialed at a high security court late last year where, according to the BBC, their lawyers were concerned about serious procedural problems.
Revised:  The accused stood trial at a high security court late last year where, according to the BBC, their lawyers were concerned about serious procedural problems.
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Original: The three activists, who were associated members of the New Citizen’s Movement , were arrested last year during an anti-corruption protest that urged government officials to reveal their earnings.
Revised: The three activists, who were associated members of the , were arrested last year during an anti-corruption protest that urged government officials to reveal their earnings.
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Original:  Chinese Prime Minster Xi Jinping, launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption after his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
Revised:  Chinese Prime Minster launched an initiative to crackdown on corruption after his appointment in 2012, however grassroots campaigns and activists have also been targeted with this drive.
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Original:  The victim had been said to have been suffering from underlying health problems.
Revised:  The victim is said to have been suffering from underlying health problems.
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Original:  With the death of this victim, the number of deaths that have occurred in Scotland from the virus has now increased to 30.
Revised:  With the death of this victim, the number of deaths that have occurred in Scotland from the virus has now reached 30.
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Original: The  automobile manufacturer Ford has said that it posted a net profit of US$997 million in the third quarter of this year, and predicted that it would be "solidly profitable" by 2011.
Revised: The US automobile manufacturer Ford has said that it posted a net profit of US$997 million in the third quarter of this year, and predicted that it would be "solidly profitable" by 2011.
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Original: The US automobile manufacturer Ford has said that it posted a net profit of US$997 million in the third quarter of this year, and predicted that it would be "solidly profitable" by 2011.
Revised: Alan Mulally, CEO of FordThe US automobile manufacturer Ford has said that it posted a net profit of US$997 million in the third quarter of this year, and predicted that it would be "solidly profitable" by 2011.
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Original:  Our third-quarter results clearly show Ford is making tremendous progress despite the prolonged economic slump," said the firm's chief executive officer, Alan Mulally.
Revised: " Our third-quarter results clearly show Ford is making tremendous progress despite the prolonged economic slump," said the firm's chief executive officer, Alan Mulally.
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Original:  The girl was left deserted in front of her home by the boys later  
Revised:  The girl was left deserted in front of her home by the boys later . 
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Original:  Also, they filed a case of threatening and rape has been filed against Bindu Nehru Nagar police station  
Revised:  Also, they filed a case of threatening and rape has been filed against Bindu Nehru Nagar police station . 
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Original:  The police are searching for Binduas he has fled after the incident
Revised:  Bindu's father was also unreachable
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Original: Bindu, aged seventeen , is a resident of a slum in Kherwadi, Bandra, Mumbai, raped his four year old neighbour along with his sixteen year old friend in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
Revised: A seventeen year old resident of a slum in Kherwadi, Bandra, Mumbai, raped his four year old neighbour along with his sixteen year old friend in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
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Original: Bindu, aged seventeen , is a resident of a slum in Kherwadi, Bandra, Mumbai, raped his four year old neighbour along with his sixteen year old friend in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
Revised: Bindu, aged seventeen , is a resident of a slum in Bandra, Mumbai, raped his four year old neighbour along with his sixteen year old friend in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
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Original: Bindu, aged seventeen , is a resident of a slum in Kherwadi, Bandra, Mumbai, raped his four year old neighbour along with his sixteen year old friend in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
Revised: Bindu, aged seventeen , is a resident of a slum in Kherwadi, Bandra, Mumbai, India, has been accused of raping his four year old neighbour along with his sixteen year old friend in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
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Original:  Also, they filed a case of threatening and rape has been filed against Bindu Nehru Nagar police station.
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Original: A seventeen year old resident of a slum in Bandra, Mumbai, India,  has been accused of raping his four year old neighbour along with his sixteen year old friend in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
Revised: A seventeen year old resident of a slum in Bandra, Mumbai, India, along with his sixteen year old friend, has been accused of raping his four year old neighbour along with his sixteen year old friend in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
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Original: A seventeen year old resident of a slum in Bandra, Mumbai, India,  has been accused of raping his four year old neighbour along with his sixteen year old friend in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
Revised: A seventeen year old resident of a slum in Bandra, Mumbai, India, has been accused of raping his four year old neighbour in his home when his parents were away yesterday around 22:00 (+5.5 UTC).
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Original:  The recent study, published in the journal Geophysical Research Letters, brings together seismic data from the formation of the rift, showing that it is driven by similar processes to those at the bottom of oceans     
Revised:  The recent study, published in the journal Geophysical Research Letters, brings together seismic data from the formation of the rift, showing that it is driven by similar processes to those at the bottom of oceans . 
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Original:  the National Yemen Seismological Observatory Center;
Revised:  National Yemen Seismological Observatory Center;
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Original:  Geologists have confirmed that the African continent is being torn in two, forming a new ocean.
Revised: Wikepidia is not areliable source to use for a term paper, however, I hope the following information may be of some use to any interested readers. ' of some use to any interested readers. Geologists have confirmed that the African continent is being torn in two, forming a new ocean.
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Original:  The recent study, published in the journal Geophysical Research Letters  , brings together seismic data from the formation of the rift, showing that it is driven by similar processes to those at the bottom of oceans.
Revised:  The recent study, published in the journal Geophysical Research Letters '' , brings together seismic data from the formation of the rift, showing that it is driven by similar processes to those at the bottom of oceans.
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Original:  The recent study, published in the journal Geophysical Research Letters '' , brings together seismic data from the formation of the rift, showing that it is driven by similar processes to those at the bottom of oceans.
Revised:  The recent study, published in the journal Geophysical Research Letters , brings together seismic data from the formation of the rift, showing that it is driven by similar processes to those at the bottom of oceans.
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Original: Scientists at Washington predict that Mt. Kilimanjaro 's , Africa's tallest mountain peak, ice sheets are going to melt in the next twenty years .
Revised: Ohio, US scientists have predicted that the ice sheets of Mt. Kilimanjaro 's , Africa's tallest mountain peak, ice sheets are going to melt in the next twenty years .
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Original: Scientists at Washington predict that Mt. Kilimanjaro 's , Africa's tallest mountain peak, ice sheets are going to melt in the next twenty years .
Revised: Scientists at Washington predict that Mt. Kilimanjaro , Africa's tallest mountain peak, ice sheets are going to melt in the next twenty years .
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Original: Scientists at Washington predict that Mt. Kilimanjaro 's , Africa's tallest mountain peak, ice sheets are going to melt in the next twenty years .
Revised: Scientists at Washington predict that Mt. Kilimanjaro 's , Africa's tallest mountain peak, will melt in the next twenty years .
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Original:  The ice that was present in 1912 gradually decreased by 85\% by 2000 and 26\% of the rest by 2007.
Revised:  The ice that was present in 1912 gradually decreased by 85\% by 2000 , and another 26\% of the rest by 2007.
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Original:  The ice that was present in 1912 gradually decreased by 85\% by 2000 and 26\% of the rest by 2007.
Revised:  The ice that was present in 1912 gradually decreased by 85\% by 2000 and 26\% by 2007.
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Original:  The tests were conducted by Lonnie Thompson, Ohio University (professor) .
Revised:  The tests were conducted by Lonnie Thompson, a professor at Ohio University .
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Original:  Though change in cloudiness and weather would retreat the ice but the melting rate is high, predicted scientists .
Revised:  Though change in cloudiness and weather would retreat the ice but the melting rate is high, scientists predicted .
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Original: Scientists at the Ohio University are predicted that the ice sheets of Mt. Kilimanjaro, Africa's tallest mountain peak, will melt in the next twenty years due to global warming Though change in cloudiness and weather would retreat the ice but the melting rate is high, scientists predicted .
Revised: Scientists at the Ohio University predicted that the ice sheets of Mt. Kilimanjaro, Africa's tallest mountain peak, will melt in the next twenty years due to global warming Though change in cloudiness and weather would retreat the ice but the melting rate is high, scientists predicted .
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Original: Scientists at the Ohio University are predicted that the ice sheets of Mt. Kilimanjaro, Africa's tallest mountain peak, will melt in the next twenty years due to global warming Though change in cloudiness and weather would retreat the ice but the melting rate is high, scientists predicted .
Revised: Scientists at the Ohio University are predicted that the ice sheets of Mt. Kilimanjaro, Africa's tallest mountain peak, will melt in the next twenty years due to global warming Change in cloudiness and weather would retreat the ice but the melting rate is high, scientists predicted .
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Original: In Virginia, polls indicate Republican candidate Bob McDonnell is favored to win over Democrat Creigh Deeds in the governor's race.
Revised: In Virginia, results indicated that Republican candidate Bob McDonnell is favored to win over Democrat Creigh Deeds in the governor's race.
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Original: In Virginia, polls indicate Republican candidate Bob McDonnell is favored to win over Democrat Creigh Deeds in the governor's race.
Revised: In Virginia, polls indicate Republican candidate Bob McDonnell won over Democrat Creigh Deeds in the governor's race.
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Original:  Polls indicate many independent voters in the state who last year voted for Obama are supporting McDonnell.
Revised:  Polls suggested that many independent voters in the state who last year voted for Obama are supporting McDonnell.
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Original:  Polls indicate many independent voters in the state who last year voted for Obama are supporting McDonnell.
Revised:  Polls indicate many independent voters in the state who last year voted for Obama supported McDonnell.
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Original: Voters went to the polls on Tuesday for several US state elections seen  as a referendum on the policies of President Barack Obama one year after his election .
Revised: Voters went to the polls on Tuesday for several US state elections seen by some as a referendum on the policies of President Barack Obama one year after his election .
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Original:  Another race being closely watched is in New Jersey, normally a safe Democratic area.
Revised:  Another race being closely watched was in New Jersey, normally a safe Democratic area.
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Original:  Democratic Governor Jon Corzine is competing with Republican challenger Chris Christie.
Revised:  Democratic Governor Jon Corzine was competing with Republican challenger Chris Christie.
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Original:  A winner has not yet been determined, although Corzine was reported to be trailing Christie.
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Original: Voters went to the polls on Tuesday for several US state elections seen by some as a referendum on the policies of President Barack Obama one year after his election (and by others as a purely local election  .
Revised: Voters went to the polls on Tuesday for several US state elections seen by some as a referendum on the policies of President Barack Obama one year after his election (and by others as a purely local election ) .
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