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Original:  He was previously Deputy for Acquisition and Systems Management in the office of the . Greene joined the Army as  officer in 1980 after graduating from .
Revised:  He was previously Deputy for Acquisition and Systems Management in the office of the . Greene joined the Army as an officer in 1980 after graduating from .
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Original: More than one hundred of cars were burned out by young people on the night of July 13 in Île-de-France, the metropolitan area of Paris.
Revised: More than one hundred cars were burned out by young people on the night of July 13 in Île-de-France, the metropolitan area of Paris.
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Original: More than one hundred of cars were burned out by young people on the night of July 13 in Île-de-France, the metropolitan area of Paris.
Revised: More than one hundred of cars were burned by young people on the night of July 13 in Île-de-France, the metropolitan area of Paris.
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Original:  Police used their flash-balls and their smoke grenades.
Revised:  Police used flash-balls and their smoke grenades.
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Original:  Police used their flash-balls and their smoke grenades.
Revised:  Police used their flash-balls and smoke grenades.
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Original:  The riots ended up with 70 men being arrested.
Revised:  The riots ended with 70 men being arrested.
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Original:  A police officer was wounded by a rocket and was taken to the hospital.
Revised:  A police officer was wounded by a rocket and was taken to hospital.
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Original:  The Dalai Lama fled Tibet after an uprising rebelling against China failed in 1959.
Revised: He added,“The Dalai Lama is already 75. We hope he will face up to reality, change his stand and make a correct choice for the remainder of his life.” The Dalai Lama fled Tibet after an uprising rebelling against China failed in 1959.
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Original:  This follows the little progress achieved between "sharply divided" talks between China and the representatives of the Dalai Lama in China.
Revised:  This follows the little progress achieved at "sharply divided" talks between China and the representatives of the Dalai Lama in China.
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Original:  He elaborated, stating that "it will seriously undermine the foundations of Sino-US political relations", and that China would take "corresponding action to make relevant countries see their mistakes ".
Revised:  He elaborated, stating that "it will seriously undermine the foundations of Sino-US political relations", and that China would take "corresponding action to make relevant countries see their mistakes ."
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Original:  Tibet saw major unrest in March of 2008, and riots and demonstrations are a regular occurrence, although the Chinese Government believes that  policies in Tibet are correct.
Revised:  Tibet saw major unrest in March of 2008, and riots and demonstrations are a regular occurrence, although the Chinese Government believes that its policies in Tibet are correct.
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Original:  This follows tension between the United States and China already caused by issues over internet censorship and the Taiwanese arms deal announced last week.
Revised:  This development adds to previous tension between the United States and China already caused by issues over internet censorship and the Taiwanese arms deal announced last week.
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Original:  This follows tension between the United States and China already caused by issues over internet censorship and the Taiwanese arms deal announced last week.
Revised:  This follows tension between the United States and China , caused by issues over internet censorship and the Taiwanese arms deal announced last week.
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Original:  "The Hamas has reveled its true face, from now on we will act against it freely", an IDF source said.
Revised:  "The Hamas has revealed its true face, from now on we will act against it freely", an IDF source said.
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Original:  During the past 4 years, thousands of mortar shells and rockets have been fired on Israeli towns and villages by Palestinian militant organizations
Revised:  During the past 4 years, thousands of mortar shells and rockets have been fired on Israeli towns and villages by Palestinian terrorist organizations
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Original: File:Supersonic.arp.750pix.jpg|Concorde, a joint Anglo-French project, has not been in service since 2003.
Revised: File:Supersonic.arp.750pix.jpg|Concorde, a joint Anglo-French project, withdrawn from service in 2003.
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Original: ]] A French court today launched its trial of five men and a US airline over the Concorde disaster.
Revised: ]] A French court today launched the trial of five men and a US airline over the Concorde disaster.
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Original:  The prosecution case agrees with the facts set out in the final accident report, which  by international law  was written from an entirely different investigation and cannot be introduced in court.
Revised:  The prosecution case agrees with the facts set out in the final accident report, which , by international law was written from an entirely different investigation and cannot be introduced in court.
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Original:  The prosecution case agrees with the facts set out in the final accident report, which  by international law  was written from an entirely different investigation and cannot be introduced in court.
Revised:  The prosecution case agrees with the facts set out in the final accident report, which by international law , was written from an entirely different investigation and cannot be introduced in court.
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Original:  Prosecutors and investigators concluded that as Concorde struck the part on takeoff a tyre was burst and ripped apart, sending chunks of rubber flying.
Revised:  Prosecutors and investigators concluded that as Concorde struck the part on takeoff a tyre burst and ripped apart, sending chunks of rubber flying.
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Original:  Concorde's pilots attempted to circle round for an emergency landing back at Charles de Gaulle, but instead struck a hotel approximatly three kilometres (two miles) from the airport.
Revised:  Concorde's pilots attempted to circle round for an emergency landing back at Charles de Gaulle, but instead struck a hotel approximately three kilometres (two miles) from the airport.
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Original:  The majority of victims were Germans heading to meet up with a cruise liner for a Caribbean holiday, with the remainder of the 100 passengers being from Austria.
Revised:  The majority of victims were Germans heading to meet up with a cruise liner for a Caribbean holiday, the remainder of the 100 passengers being from Austria.
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Original:  The majority of victims were Germans heading to meet up with a cruise liner for a Caribbean holiday, with the remainder of the 100 passengers being from Austria.
Revised:  The majority of victims were Germans heading to meet up with a cruise liner for a Caribbean holiday, with the remainder of the 100 passengers were from Austria.
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Original:  John Taylor, the Continental mechanic who is alleged to have built and fitted the nonstandard part, and his boss Stanley Ford have been targetted for prosecution.
Revised:  John Taylor, the Continental mechanic who is alleged to have built and fitted the nonstandard part, and his boss Stanley Ford , have been targeted for prosecution.
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Original:  The former chief of civil aviation, Claude Frantzen, is facing charges on the same logic .
Revised:  The former chief of civil aviation, Claude Frantzen, is facing charges on the same basis .
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Original:  Each individual can be imprisoned  up to three years and fined up to €50,900 (US$71,000.
Revised:  Each individual can be imprisoned for up to three years and fined up to €50,900 (US$71,000.
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Original:  The airline's defense claims the part on the runway had no role to play in the accident.
Revised:  The airline's defence claims the part on the runway had no role to play in the accident.
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Original:  TV channel Canal+ has previously suggested the investigations and prosecution were a coverup of more serious issues with Concorde.
Revised:  TV channel Canal+ previously suggested the investigations and prosecution were a coverup of more serious issues with Concorde.
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Original:  The judge cautioned against losing touch with the human aspect of what is anticipated would be a very technical trial.
Revised:  The judge cautioned against losing touch with the human aspect of what is anticipated to be a very technical trial.
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Original:  The estimated cost is expected to be in excess of 3m euro (US$4.2 m ).
Revised:  The estimated cost is expected to be in excess of 3 million Euro (US$4.2 m ).
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Original:  The estimated cost is expected to be in excess of 3m euro (US$4.2 m ).
Revised:  The estimated cost is expected to be in excess of 3m euro (US$4.2 million ).
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Original:  The investigation found some contributary causes that can be linked to Air France.
Revised:  The investigation found some contributory causes that can be linked to Air France.
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Original:  Air Frace lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident . " It [  is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
Revised:  Air France lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident . " It [ is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
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Original:  Air Frace lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident . " It [  is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
Revised:  Air Frace lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident ; " It [ is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
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Original:  Air Frace lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident . " It [  is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
Revised:  Air Frace lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident . " [ is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
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Original:  Air Frace lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident . " It [  is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
Revised:  Air Frace lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident . " It [i is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
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Original:  Air Frace lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident . " It [  is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
Revised:  Air Frace lawyer Fernand Garnault, an aviation specialist, was adamant that Continental did play the main role in the accident . " It [ t is clear that a piece from a Continental plane fell on the runway.
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Original:  Few families are represented at the trial, because all the passengers struck a deal with Air France to accept compensation in exchange to waiving their right to take legal action, leaving only those killed in the hotel and the crew.
Revised:  Few families are represented at the trial, because all the passengers struck a deal with Air France to accept compensation in exchange for waiving their right to take legal action, leaving only those killed in the hotel and the crew.
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Original:  However, French group Fenvac are representing the families, and spokesman Stephane Gicquel said that the families would be observing keenly and that " This [  tragedy is part of their personal history and of their family history."
Revised:  However, French group Fenvac are representing the families, and spokesman Stephane Gicquel said that the families would be observing keenly , that " This [ tragedy is part of their personal history and of their family history."
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Original:  However, French group Fenvac are representing the families, and spokesman Stephane Gicquel said that the families would be observing keenly and that " This [  tragedy is part of their personal history and of their family history."
Revised:  However, French group Fenvac are representing the families, and spokesman Stephane Gicquel said that the families would be observing keenly and that " [ tragedy is part of their personal history and of their family history."
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Original:  However, French group Fenvac are representing the families, and spokesman Stephane Gicquel said that the families would be observing keenly and that " This [  tragedy is part of their personal history and of their family history."
Revised:  However, French group Fenvac are representing the families, and spokesman Stephane Gicquel said that the families would be observing keenly and that " This [t tragedy is part of their personal history and of their family history."
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Original:  However, French group Fenvac are representing the families, and spokesman Stephane Gicquel said that the families would be observing keenly and that " This [  tragedy is part of their personal history and of their family history."
Revised:  However, French group Fenvac are representing the families, and spokesman Stephane Gicquel said that the families would be observing keenly and that " This [ his tragedy is part of their personal history and of their family history."
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Original:  Captain Christian Marty's family's lawyer, Roland Rappaport, said outside court today that This ] accident should have been avoided.
Revised:  Captain Christian Marty's family's lawyer, Roland Rappaport, said outside court today that , " ] accident should have been avoided.
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Original:  Captain Christian Marty's family's lawyer, Roland Rappaport, said outside court today that This ] accident should have been avoided.
Revised:  Captain Christian Marty's family's lawyer, Roland Rappaport, said outside court today that This t] accident should have been avoided.
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Original:  Captain Christian Marty's family's lawyer, Roland Rappaport, said outside court today that This ] accident should have been avoided.
Revised:  Captain Christian Marty's family's lawyer, Roland Rappaport, said outside court today that This ]his accident should have been avoided.
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Original:  The weaknesses of the Concorde had been known for 20 years," while Air France's lawyers stated the inquiries had not located any evidence to suggest that Concorde had indeed encountered problems before reaching the metal debris.
Revised:  The weaknesses of the Concorde had been known for twenty years," while Air France's lawyers stated the inquiries had not located any evidence to suggest that Concorde had indeed encountered problems before reaching the metal debris.
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Original:  Daniel Soulez Larivière, who represents Frantzen, said that "this accident was unforeseeable," and the original investigations should have agreed.
Revised:  Daniel Soulez Larivière, who represents Frantzen, said , "this accident was unforeseeable," and the original investigations should have agreed.
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Original:  Bourgeois recently alleged that authorites were indeed hiding flaws with the airliner, saying " Nothing [  was allowed to disturb Air France [ ... ] orders came from very high in the administration," and that investigations into Concorde's safety were shut down by the government.
Revised:  Bourgeois recently alleged that authorities were indeed hiding flaws with the airliner, saying " Nothing [ was allowed to disturb Air France [ ... ] orders came from very high in the administration," and that investigations into Concorde's safety were shut down by the government.
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Original:  Bourgeois recently alleged that authorites were indeed hiding flaws with the airliner, saying " Nothing [  was allowed to disturb Air France [ ... ] orders came from very high in the administration," and that investigations into Concorde's safety were shut down by the government.
Revised:  Bourgeois recently alleged that authorites were indeed hiding flaws with the airliner, saying " [ was allowed to disturb Air France [ ... ] orders came from very high in the administration," and that investigations into Concorde's safety were shut down by the government.
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Original:  Bourgeois recently alleged that authorites were indeed hiding flaws with the airliner, saying " Nothing [  was allowed to disturb Air France [ ... ] orders came from very high in the administration," and that investigations into Concorde's safety were shut down by the government.
Revised:  Bourgeois recently alleged that authorites were indeed hiding flaws with the airliner, saying " Nothing [n was allowed to disturb Air France [ ... ] orders came from very high in the administration," and that investigations into Concorde's safety were shut down by the government.
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Original:  Bourgeois recently alleged that authorites were indeed hiding flaws with the airliner, saying " Nothing [  was allowed to disturb Air France [ ... ] orders came from very high in the administration," and that investigations into Concorde's safety were shut down by the government.
Revised:  Bourgeois recently alleged that authorites were indeed hiding flaws with the airliner, saying " Nothing [ othing was allowed to disturb Air France [ ... ] orders came from very high in the administration," and that investigations into Concorde's safety were shut down by the government.
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Original: Concorde's pilots attempted to circle round for an emergency landing back at Charles de Gaulle  , but instead struck a hotel approximately three kilometres (two miles) from the airport.
Revised: Concorde's pilots attempted to circle round for an emergency landing back at Charles de Gaulle Airport , but instead struck a hotel approximately three kilometres (two miles) from the airport.
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Original:  Also charged are two members of the UK-French firm behind Concorde - Aerospatiale , who have since merged into Airbus parent EADS.
Revised:  Also charged are two members of the UK-French firm behind Concorde - Aérospatiale , who have since merged into Airbus parent EADS.
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Original:  Continental's lawyers say they can call 28 witnesses to give similar evidence and told the Parisian that they would seek a dismissal of the charges today.
Revised:  Continental's lawyers say they can call 28 witnesses to give similar evidence and told the Le Parisien that they would seek a dismissal of the charges today.
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Original:  The airport itself was also criticised for having canceled a scheduled sweep of the runway.
Revised:  The airport itself was also criticised for having cancelled a scheduled sweep of the runway.
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Original:  A metal strip had been machined by mechanics instead of using a certified part.
Revised:  A titanium strip had been machined by mechanics instead of using a certified part.
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Original:  This  strip dropped off the aircraft, leaving a 43cm (17in) piece of titanium on the runway.
Revised:  This 43cm (17in) strip dropped off the aircraft, leaving a 43cm (17in) piece of titanium on the runway.
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Original:  This  strip dropped off the aircraft, leaving a 43cm (17in) piece of titanium on the runway.
Revised:  This strip dropped off the aircraft, onto the runway.
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Original:  A titanium strip had been machined by mechanics instead of using a certified part.
Revised:  A metal strip had been machined by mechanics instead of using a certified part.
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Original:  This 43cm (17in) strip dropped off the aircraft, onto the runway.
Revised:  This strip dropped off the aircraft, onto the runway.
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Original:  This 43cm (17in) strip dropped off the aircraft, onto the runway.
Revised:  This 43cm (17in) strip dropped off the aircraft, leaving a 43cm (17in) piece of titanium on the runway.
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Original: ]] A French court Tuesday launched the trial of five men and a US airline over the Concorde disaster . 113 people were killed when the supersonic jet struck a hotel near Paris in 2000.
Revised: ]] A French court Tuesday launched the trial of five men and a US airline over the . 113 people were killed when the supersonic jet struck a hotel near Paris in 2000.
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Original:  Both official investigations found that a Continental Airlines McDonnell Douglas DC-10 had taken off five minutes before Concorde with an improvised repair.
Revised:  Both official investigations found that a Continental Airlines had taken off five minutes before Concorde with an improvised repair.
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Original:  This strip dropped off the aircraft, leaving a 43cm (17in) piece of titanium on the runway.
Revised:  This strip dropped off the aircraft, leaving a 43cm (17in) piece of on the runway.
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Original:  A large piece slammed into the underside of the wing hard enough to trigger a pressure wave that ruptured the fuel tank.
Revised:  A large piece slammed into the underside of the wing hard enough to trigger a that ruptured the fuel tank.
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Original:  Concorde's pilots attempted to circle round for an emergency landing back at Charles de Gaulle Airport , but instead struck a hotel approximately three kilometres (two miles) from the airport.
Revised:  Concorde's pilots attempted to circle round for an emergency landing back at , but instead struck a hotel approximately three kilometres (two miles) from the airport.
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Original:  TV channel Canal+ previously suggested the investigations and prosecution were a coverup of more serious issues with Concorde.
Revised:  TV channel previously suggested the investigations and prosecution were a coverup of more serious issues with Concorde.
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Original:  Continental's lawyers say they can call 28 witnesses to give similar evidence and told the Le Parisien that they would seek a dismissal of the charges today.
Revised:  Continental's lawyers say they can call 28 witnesses to give similar evidence and told the that they would seek a dismissal of the charges today.
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Original:  The case opened with judge Dominique Andreassier reading out every one of the 113 names of the deceased, followed by the charges against the six, in the court in Pontoise . Related new 
Revised:  The case opened with judge Dominique Andreassier reading out every one of the 113 names of the deceased, followed by the charges against the six, in the court in . Related new 
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Original:  The case opened with judge Dominique Andreassier reading out every one of the 113 names of the deceased, followed by the charges against the six, in the court in Pontoise . Related new 
Revised:  The case opened with judge Dominique Andreassier reading out every one of the 113 names of the deceased, followed by the charges against the six, in the court in Pontoise . Related news 
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Original: Boris Johnson in 2009. , the politician currently serving as , announced yesterday that he intends to stand for Parliament in the 2015 General Election.
Revised: Boris Johnson in 2009. , the politician currently serving as , announced yesterday he intends to stand for Parliament in the 2015 General Election.
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