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Original:  The protesters made paper aeroplanes out of confidential Whitehall documents that , it is claimed show collusion between BAA ( British Airports Authority  ) and the Government department of transport to subvert the public consulation process on the proposed third runway.
Revised:  The protesters made paper aeroplanes out of confidential Whitehall documents that , it is claimed show collusion between the British Airports Authority ) and the Government department of transport to subvert the public consulation process on the proposed third runway.
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Original:  The protesters made paper aeroplanes out of confidential Whitehall documents that , it is claimed show collusion between BAA ( British Airports Authority  ) and the Government department of transport to subvert the public consulation process on the proposed third runway.
Revised:  The protesters made paper aeroplanes out of confidential Whitehall documents that , it is claimed show collusion between BAA ( British Airports Authority ) and the Government department of transport to subvert the public consultation process on the proposed third runway.
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Original:  BAA claims a third runway is essential for Britain's economy, and would reduce congestion at heathrow , actually cutting emissions, and is necessary to keep up with the booming aviation industry.
Revised:  B.A.A. claims a third runway is essential for Britain's economy, and would reduce congestion at heathrow , actually cutting emissions, and is necessary to keep up with the booming aviation industry.
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Original:  BAA claims a third runway is essential for Britain's economy, and would reduce congestion at heathrow , actually cutting emissions, and is necessary to keep up with the booming aviation industry.
Revised:  BAA claims a third runway is essential for Britain's economy, and would reduce congestion at Heathrow , actually cutting emissions, and is necessary to keep up with the booming aviation industry.
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Original:  This would allow the number of flights to increase from 480,000 a year to around 702,000  "We've come to this symbolic home of democracy to make clear that the consultation process of the third runway at Heathrow has, from the beginning, been a sham.
Revised:  This would allow the number of flights to increase from 480,000 a year to around 702,000 . "We've come to this symbolic home of democracy to make clear that the consultation process of the third runway at Heathrow has, from the beginning, been a sham.
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Original:  Matthew Knowles from the Society of British Aerospace Companies made a statement to the BBC that: "These stunts are becoming tiresome and do nothing more than peddle inaccurate propaganda  " The rooftop occupation comes two days after Greenpeace protesters scaled an Airbus A320 which had just touched down at Heathrow from Manchester, and follows a succession of direct action protests in the UK in relation to climate change
Revised:  Matthew Knowles from the Society of British Aerospace Companies made a statement to the B.B.C. that: "These stunts are becoming tiresome and do nothing more than peddle inaccurate propaganda " The rooftop occupation comes two days after Greenpeace protesters scaled an Airbus A320 which had just touched down at Heathrow from Manchester, and follows a succession of direct action protests in the UK in relation to climate change
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Original:  Matthew Knowles from the Society of British Aerospace Companies made a statement to the BBC that: "These stunts are becoming tiresome and do nothing more than peddle inaccurate propaganda  " The rooftop occupation comes two days after Greenpeace protesters scaled an Airbus A320 which had just touched down at Heathrow from Manchester, and follows a succession of direct action protests in the UK in relation to climate change
Revised:  Matthew Knowles from the Society of British Aerospace Companies made a statement to the BBC that: "These stunts are becoming tiresome and do nothing more than peddle inaccurate propaganda . " The rooftop occupation comes two days after Greenpeace protesters scaled an Airbus A320 which had just touched down at Heathrow from Manchester, and follows a succession of direct action protests in the UK in relation to climate change
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Original:  Matthew Knowles from the Society of British Aerospace Companies made a statement to the BBC that: "These stunts are becoming tiresome and do nothing more than peddle inaccurate propaganda  " The rooftop occupation comes two days after Greenpeace protesters scaled an Airbus A320 which had just touched down at Heathrow from Manchester, and follows a succession of direct action protests in the UK in relation to climate change
Revised:  Matthew Knowles from the Society of British Aerospace Companies made a statement to the BBC that: "These stunts are becoming tiresome and do nothing more than peddle inaccurate propaganda " The rooftop occupation comes two days after Greenpeace protesters scaled an Airbus A320 which had just touched down at Heathrow from Manchester, and follows a succession of direct action protests in the U.K. in relation to climate change
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Original:  The schedule, which the British newspaper ‘’The Guardian ’’ defines as “sports dominated,” covered sport for eleven and a half hours of Saturday afternoon.
Revised:  The schedule, which the British newspaper The Guardian defines as “sports dominated,” covered sport for eleven and a half hours of Saturday afternoon.
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Original:  She stood alongside secretary general of Fifa Jérôme Valcke, Blatter and soccer greats including Uruguayan during the draw. w|New York Daily News writer Frank Isola said his favourite moment of the draw was when Ghiggia dropped a pingpong ball and Lima in her dress retrieved it.
Revised:  She stood alongside secretary general of Fifa Jérôme Valcke, Blatter and soccer greats including Uruguayan during the draw. writer Frank Isola said his favourite moment of the draw was when Ghiggia dropped a pingpong ball and Lima in her dress retrieved it.
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Original:  She stood alongside secretary general of Fifa Jérôme Valcke, Blatter and soccer greats including Uruguayan during the draw. w|New York Daily News writer Frank Isola said his favourite moment of the draw was when Ghiggia dropped a pingpong ball and Lima in her dress retrieved it.
Revised:  She stood alongside secretary general of Fifa Jérôme Valcke, Blatter and soccer greats including Uruguayan during the draw. w|New York Daily News writer Frank Isola said his favorite moment of the draw was when Ghiggia dropped a pingpong ball and Lima in her dress retrieved it.
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Original:  This should have been about football." broadcaster , the first woman to be a Match of the Day commentator for the network, is quoted by the Sunday Telegraph '' as saying, "What a missed opportunity.
Revised:  This should have been about football." broadcaster , the first woman to be a Match of the Day commentator for the network, is quoted by the Sunday Telegraph as saying, "What a missed opportunity.
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Original: File photo of Casey Stoney from last year Over the weekend, President faced criticism from British women associated  soccer for his support of a Brazilian model chosen model to conduct the televised draw for the . , who has no previous connection to  sport prior to her involvement as a FIFA 2014 World Cup presenter, appeared on stage wearing a gold dress with a plunging neckline with matching heels.
Revised: File photo of Casey Stoney from last year Over the weekend, President faced criticism from British women associated with soccer for his support of a Brazilian model chosen model to conduct the televised draw for the . , who has no previous connection to sport prior to her involvement as a FIFA 2014 World Cup presenter, appeared on stage wearing a gold dress with a plunging neckline with matching heels.
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Original: File photo of Casey Stoney from last year Over the weekend, President faced criticism from British women associated  soccer for his support of a Brazilian model chosen model to conduct the televised draw for the . , who has no previous connection to  sport prior to her involvement as a FIFA 2014 World Cup presenter, appeared on stage wearing a gold dress with a plunging neckline with matching heels.
Revised: File photo of Casey Stoney from last year Over the weekend, President faced criticism from British women associated soccer for his support of a Brazilian model chosen to conduct the televised draw for the . , who has no previous connection to sport prior to her involvement as a FIFA 2014 World Cup presenter, appeared on stage wearing a gold dress with a plunging neckline with matching heels.
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Original: File photo of Casey Stoney from last year Over the weekend, President faced criticism from British women associated  soccer for his support of a Brazilian model chosen model to conduct the televised draw for the . , who has no previous connection to  sport prior to her involvement as a FIFA 2014 World Cup presenter, appeared on stage wearing a gold dress with a plunging neckline with matching heels.
Revised: File photo of Casey Stoney from last year Over the weekend, President faced criticism from British women associated soccer for his support of a Brazilian model chosen model to conduct the televised draw for the . , who has no previous connection to football or sport prior to her involvement as a FIFA 2014 World Cup presenter, appeared on stage wearing a gold dress with a plunging neckline with matching heels.
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Original: File photo of Casey Stoney from last year Over the weekend, President faced criticism from British women associated  soccer for his support of a Brazilian model chosen model to conduct the televised draw for the . , who has no previous connection to  sport prior to her involvement as a FIFA 2014 World Cup presenter, appeared on stage wearing a gold dress with a plunging neckline with matching heels.
Revised: File photo of Casey Stoney from last year Over the weekend, President faced criticism from British women associated soccer for his support of a Brazilian model chosen model to conduct the televised draw for the . , who has no previous connection to sport prior to her involvement as a FIFA 2014 World Cup presenter, appeared on stage wearing a gold dress with a plunging neckline and matching heels.
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Original:  FIFA claims they were not involved in the selection of Lima's attire.
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Original: The country of Nigger has initiated an official boycott of Danish products, after the controversial Muhammad cartoons have been reprinted by a series of newspapers in Denmark and other European countries.
Revised: The country of Sudan has initiated an official boycott of Danish products, after the controversial Muhammad cartoons have been reprinted by a series of newspapers in Denmark and other European countries.
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Original: A small crowd of supporters enthusiastically greeted Prime Minister Meles Zenawi as he arrived at the polling station in Adwa  , located about 25 kilometers east of the ancient city of Axum  . Mr. Meles did not address the crowd.
Revised: A small crowd of supporters enthusiastically greeted Prime Minister Meles Zenawi as he arrived at the polling station in Adwa , located about 25 kilometers east of the ancient city of Axum . Meles did not address the crowd.
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Original:  "I fought to make sure the Ethiopian people have the right to make their decisions," he said.
Revised:  "I fought to make sure the Ethiopian people have the right to make their decisions," Meles said.
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Original:  Adwa is the birthplace of the prime minister, who is seeking his third, five-year term in office.
Revised:  Meles is seeking his third, five-year term in office.
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Original:  In the 14 years his ruling party, the Ethiopian People's Revolutionary Democratic Front, has been in power it has never had its power challenged in this mostly poor, subsistence farming region.
Revised:  His ruling party, the Ethiopian People's Revolutionary Democratic Front, has been in power it has never had its power challenged in this mostly poor, subsistence farming region.
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Original:  In the 14 years his ruling party, the Ethiopian People's Revolutionary Democratic Front, has been in power it has never had its power challenged in this mostly poor, subsistence farming region.
Revised:  In the 14 years his ruling party, the Ethiopian People's Revolutionary Democratic Front, has been in power for the 14 years. During that time, the party has not been challenged in this mostly poor, subsistence farming region.
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Original:  Casting his vote in an opposition stronghold south of the capital Addis Ababa , the head of Ethiopia's opposition Coalition for Unity and Democracy, Hailu Shawel, says in his opinion , the balloting has not been the model of democracy that people had hoped for.
Revised:  Hailu Shawel , the head of Ethiopia's opposition Coalition for Unity and Democracy, Hailu Shawel, says in his opinion , the balloting has not been the model of democracy that people had hoped for.
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Original:  Casting his vote in an opposition stronghold south of the capital Addis Ababa , the head of Ethiopia's opposition Coalition for Unity and Democracy, Hailu Shawel, says in his opinion , the balloting has not been the model of democracy that people had hoped for.
Revised:  Casting his vote in an opposition stronghold south of the capital Addis Ababa , the head of Ethiopia's opposition Coalition for Unity and Democracy, cast his vote in an opposition stronghold south of the capital Addis Ababa. Shawl says that in his opinion , the balloting has not been the model of democracy that people had hoped for.
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Original:  Casting his vote in an opposition stronghold south of the capital Addis Ababa , the head of Ethiopia's opposition Coalition for Unity and Democracy, Hailu Shawel, says in his opinion , the balloting has not been the model of democracy that people had hoped for.
Revised:  Casting his vote in an opposition stronghold south of the capital Addis Ababa , the head of Ethiopia's opposition Coalition for Unity and Democracy, Hailu Shawel, says in his opinion the balloting has not been the model of democracy that people had hoped for.
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Original:  The observers say they will investigate reports of any irregularities, but most say they have not seen any serious problems, largely calling the polls honest and fair.
Revised:  The observers say they plan to investigate reports of any irregularities, but most say they have not seen any serious problems, largely calling the polls honest and fair.
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Original: Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cupboards found the boxes which were marked as being radioactive.
Revised: Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cabinets found the boxes which were marked as being radioactive.
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Original: A school located in Edinburgh, Scotland has been sealed off after reports say that three packages , possibly containing a radioactive material were found on the school grounds.
Revised: A school located in Edinburgh, Scotland has been sealed off after reports say that three packages containing radioactive materials were found on the school grounds.
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Original:   Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cabinets found the boxes which were marked as being radioactive.
Revised:  Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cabinets found the packages which were marked as being radioactive.
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Original:  Reports say that a the packages, in one box, were marked as plutonium, radium and strontium.
Revised:  Reports say that the packages, in one box, were marked as plutonium, radium and strontium.
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Original:   According to police and fire officials, areas surrounding the Regent Language Training School have been sealed off and officials are following radioactive procedures . Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cabinets found the packages  which were marked as being radioactive.
Revised:  The areas surrounding the Regent Language Training School have been sealed off and officials are following radioactive procedures . Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cabinets found the packages which were marked as being radioactive.
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Original:   According to police and fire officials, areas surrounding the Regent Language Training School have been sealed off and officials are following radioactive procedures . Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cabinets found the packages  which were marked as being radioactive.
Revised:  According to police and fire officials, areas surrounding the Regent Language Training School were sealed off as officials investigated the packages . Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cabinets found the packages which were marked as being radioactive.
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Original:   According to police and fire officials, areas surrounding the Regent Language Training School have been sealed off and officials are following radioactive procedures . Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cabinets found the packages  which were marked as being radioactive.
Revised:  According to police and fire officials, areas surrounding the Regent Language Training School have been sealed off and officials are following radioactive procedures . Emergency services were called after someone cleaning cabinets found the packages , which were marked as being radioactive.
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Original: There were no students inside the building and no evacuations have been made at this time, but it is not yet known exactly how many people were inside the school when officials responded .
Revised: There were no students inside the building and no evacuations have been made at this time, but it is not yet known exactly how many people were inside the school when officials responded 
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Original:  Roberto Luongo stopped 24 of Colorado's 26 shots  
Revised:  Roberto Luongo stopped 24 of Colorado's 26 shots . 
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Original:  Colorado finishes their three-game road trip in eastern Canada against the Canucks, Minnesota tries to break a 4 game losing streak in an out-of-conference game against the Lightning, and the  Leafs try to pick up their fifth win in 6 games.
Revised:  Colorado finishes their three-game road trip in eastern Canada against the Canucks, Minnesota tries to break a 4 game losing streak in an out-of-conference game against the Lightning, and the Maple Leafs try to pick up their fifth win in 6 games.
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Original:  Tremors were reported as wide spread as Edinburgh, Manchester, Sheffield, Middlesbrough, Cambridge, London, Birmingham and Southampton  
Revised:  Tremors were reported as wide spread as Edinburgh, Manchester, Sheffield, Middlesbrough, Cambridge, London, Birmingham and Southampton . 
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Original:  Representatives from the British insurance industry have stet that the cost of the earthquake which hit Britain early yesterday could cost over 10 million GBP.
Revised:  Representatives from the British insurance industry have said that the cost of the earthquake which hit Britain early yesterday could cost over 10 million GBP.
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Original:  Representatives from the British insurance industry have stet that the cost of the earthquake which hit Britain early yesterday could cost over 10 million GBP.
Revised:  Representatives from the British insurance industry have stet that the cost of the earthquake which hit Britain early yesterday could be over 10 million GBP.
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Original:  The Senior claims manager at the UK bank Norwhich Unions has described the damage by saying that at the moment most insurance claims regarding the earthquake describe “ minor damage such as tiles off roofs, breakages inside the homes and brick walls collapsing."
Revised:  The Senior claims manager at the UK bank Norwich Union has described the damage by saying that at the moment most insurance claims regarding the earthquake describe “ minor damage such as tiles off roofs, breakages inside the homes and brick walls collapsing."
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Original:  The Senior claims manager at the UK bank Norwhich Unions has described the damage by saying that at the moment most insurance claims regarding the earthquake describe “ minor damage such as tiles off roofs, breakages inside the homes and brick walls collapsing."
Revised:  The Senior claims manager at the UK bank Norwhich Unions has described the damage by saying that at the moment most insurance claims regarding the earthquake describe " minor damage such as tiles off roofs, breakages inside the homes and brick walls collapsing."
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Original: The epicentre of the quake according to USGS (Source: NASA Worldwind).
Revised: The epicentre of the quake according to USGS 
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Original:  Tremors were reported as wide spread as Edinburgh, Manchester, Sheffield, Middlesbrough, Cambridge, London, Birmingham and Southampton .
Revised:  Tremors were reported as widespread as Edinburgh, Manchester, Sheffield, Middlesbrough, Cambridge, London, Birmingham and Southampton .
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Original: "We will not be deceived by this," Sadullah Abu Aman, an Islamic cleric, told Reuters in Afghanistan.
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Original:  Within minutes of landing in Bangkok, he was arrested on corruption charges by immigration police, though Shinawatra proclaims his innocence, stating that the charges against him are politically motivated.
Revised:  Within minutes of landing in Bangkok, he was arrested on corruption charges by immigration police, though Thaksin proclaims his innocence, stating that the charges against him are politically motivated.
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Original: Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915 (crop).jpg| Thaksin Shinawatra during his time in office.
Revised:  Thaksin Shinawatra during his time in office.
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Original:  He has been granted bail for 8m baht (£132,000/$261,000/€173,000) and was ordered not to leave the country.
Revised:  He has been granted bail for 8 million baht (£132,000/$261,000/€173,000) and was ordered not to leave the country.
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Original:  Had he not, he would have been sacked .
Revised:  Had he failed to do so, his employment would have been sacked .
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Original:  Had he not, he would have been sacked .
Revised:  Had he not, he would have been terminated .
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Original:  The news coincides with police officials forwarding prosecutors documents recommending Komar be charged with negligent manslaughter over the crash, which carries a maximum sentence of seven years imprisonment.
Revised:  The news coincides with police officials forwarding to prosecutors some documents recommending that Komar be charged with negligent manslaughter over the crash, which carries a maximum sentence of seven years imprisonment.
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Original: The pilot of the Boeing 737 that crashed on March 7 upon landing at Yogyakarta Airport after a domestic Indonesian flight  has been forced by his airline to resign.
Revised: The pilot of the Boeing 737 , which crashed on March 7 upon landing at Yogyakarta Airport after a domestic Indonesian flight has been forced by his airline to resign.
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Original: The pilot of the Boeing 737 that crashed on March 7 upon landing at Yogyakarta Airport after a domestic Indonesian flight  has been forced by his airline to resign.
Revised: The pilot of the Boeing 737 that crashed on March 7 upon landing at Yogyakarta Airport after a domestic Indonesian flight , has been forced by his airline to resign.
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