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Original:  The quake, which struck at 22.01 UTC yesterday evening, hit at a depth of approximately 54 kilometers according to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) . According to a member of staff at the Port Moresby Geophysical Observatory, minor effects of the quake were felt there, more than 350 miles South West of the epicenter.
Revised:  The quake, which struck at 22.01 UTC yesterday evening, hit at a depth of approximately 54 kilometers according to the United States Geological Survey . According to a member of staff at the Port Moresby Geophysical Observatory, minor effects of the quake were felt there, more than 350 miles South West of the epicenter.
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Original:  The quake, which struck at 22.01 UTC yesterday evening, hit at a depth of approximately 54 kilometers according to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) . According to a member of staff at the Port Moresby Geophysical Observatory, minor effects of the quake were felt there, more than 350 miles South West of the epicenter.
Revised:  The quake, which struck at 22.01 UTC yesterday evening, hit at a depth of approximately 54 kilometers according to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) . According to a member of staff at the Port Moresby Geophysical Observatory, minor effects of the quake were felt there, more than South West of the epicenter.
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Original:  A report posted in the local language, Tok Pisin by Radio Australia's language service, gives the general location of the quake as 110km Southeast of Madang, and there are no initial reports of any Tsunami warnings, and no reports of damage or casualties at press time
Revised:  A report posted in the local language, Tok Pisin by Radio Australia's language service, gives the general location of the quake as Southeast of Madang, and there are no initial reports of any Tsunami warnings, and no reports of damage or casualties at press time
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Original:  A report posted in the local language, Tok Pisin by Radio Australia's language service, gives the general location of the quake as 110km Southeast of Madang, and there are no initial reports of any Tsunami warnings, and no reports of damage or casualties at press time
Revised:  A report posted in the local language, Tok Pisin by Radio Australia's language service, gives the general location of the quake as 110km Southeast of Madang, and there are no initial reports of any tsunami warnings, and no reports of damage or casualties at press time
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Original:  The quake, which struck at 22.01 UTC yesterday evening, hit at a depth of approximately according to the United States Geological Survey.
Revised:  The quake, which struck at 22:01 UTC yesterday evening, hit at a depth of approximately according to the United States Geological Survey.
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Original:  Some of the newly included World Heritages are: Gelati Monastery (Georgia), Papahānaumokuākea (United States), Bagrati Cathedral (Georgia), el Camino Real de Tierra Adentro (Mexico), and São Francisco square (Brazil)  
Revised:  Some of the newly included World Heritages are: Gelati Monastery (Georgia), Papahānaumokuākea (United States), Bagrati Cathedral (Georgia), el Camino Real de Tierra Adentro (Mexico), and São Francisco square (Brazil) . 
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Original:  Some of the newly included World Heritages are: Gelati Monastery (Georgia), Papahānaumokuākea (United States ), Bagrati Cathedral (Georgia ), el Camino Real de Tierra Adentro (Mexico), and São Francisco square (Brazil).
Revised:  Some of the newly included World Heritages are: Gelati Monastery (Georgia), Papahānaumokuākea (United States ), el Camino Real de Tierra Adentro (Mexico), and São Francisco square (Brazil).
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Original:  We don't plan to continue developing Wave as a stand-alone product ". Hölzle also said that as a "web app for real time communication and collaboration, it set a high bar for what was possible in a Web browser.
Revised:  We don't plan to continue developing Wave as a stand-alone product ." Hölzle also said that as a "web app for real time communication and collaboration, it set a high bar for what was possible in a Web browser.
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Original:  We weren't quite sure how users would respond to this radically different kind of communication ". Google says that it will continue the service until the end of the year.
Revised:  We weren't quite sure how users would respond to this radically different kind of communication ." Google says that it will continue the service until the end of the year.
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Original:  In addition, we will work on tools so that users easily “liberate” their content from Wave," Google said
Revised:  In addition, we will work on tools so that users easily "liberate" their content from Wave," Google said
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Original:  Technology company Google has decided to flip the switch on the Google Wave social-networking service.
Revised: File:Google Wave.jpg| Technology company Google has decided to flip the switch on the Google Wave social-networking service.
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Original: Technology company Google has decided to flip the switch on the Google Wave social-networking service.
Revised:  Google has decided to flip the switch on the Google Wave social-networking service.
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Original:  It integrates IM-like features into its service.
Revised:  It integrates -like features into its service.
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Original:  being located in , to the north-west of Edinburgh's city centre, a free Gallery bus service is available  ]] 
Revised:  being located in , to the north-west of Edinburgh's city centre, a free Gallery bus service is available . ]] 
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Original:  being located in , to the north-west of Edinburgh's city centre, a free Gallery bus service is available  ]] 
Revised:  being located in , to the north-west of Edinburgh's city centre, a free Gallery bus service is available .]] 
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Original: Saturday saw the opening of two new exhibitions at 's . Wikinews attended Thursday's press preview for the event where a full contingent of the capital's press turned out to see the striking collection of paintings, photographs, and other works.
Revised: This weekend saw the opening of two new exhibitions at 's . Wikinews attended Thursday's press preview for the event where a full contingent of the capital's press turned out to see the striking collection of paintings, photographs, and other works.
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Original:  Alongside this broad range of works, a three-room display of pieces on-loan from the Foundation — with a dramatic painted steel relief, 'borrowed' from the Tate in — runs from March 14 through to January 10 next year.
Revised:  Alongside this broad range of works, a three-room display of pieces on-loan from the Foundation — with a dramatic painted steel relief, 'borrowed' from the in — runs from March 14 through to January 10 next year.
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Original: Campbell testified against former president Taylor for his war crimes.
Revised: Campbell claims being in court was "a big inconvenience for me."
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Original: Campbell claims being in court was "a big inconvenience for me ." Supermodel Naomi Campbell testified for prosecutors on Thursday in a war crimes case against former Liberian president Charles Taylor.
Revised: Campbell claims being in court was "a big inconvenience ." Supermodel Naomi Campbell testified for prosecutors on Thursday in a war crimes case against former Liberian president Charles Taylor.
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Original: A court in Perth, Western Australia is set to deliver a verdict on whether an islamic woman can testify while wearing a Burqa.
Revised: A court in Perth, Western Australia is set to deliver a verdict on whether an Islamic woman can testify while wearing a Burqa.
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Original:  Submissions were made today to district court judge, Shaun Deane by both prosecution and defence lawyers regarding whether a woman can give evidence about a fraud case infront of a jury, while wearing the traditional covering.
Revised:  Submissions were made today to district court judge, Shaun Deane by both prosecution and defence lawyers regarding whether a woman can give evidence about a fraud case in front of a jury, while wearing the traditional covering.
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Original:  The woman who claims to be a devout Muslim, wishes not to show her face to men and says she might be too uncomfortable to give a sufficient testimony if uncovered infront of all the people in the courtroom.
Revised:  The woman who claims to be a devout Muslim, wishes not to show her face to men and says she might be too uncomfortable to give a sufficient testimony if uncovered in front of all the people in the courtroom.
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Original:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, acquired both state and federal government funding in a fradulent manner to the amount of $1.125 million Australian . Defence laywers pledged that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury, if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
Revised:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, acquired both state and federal government funding in a fraudulent manner to the amount of $1.125 million Australian . Defence laywers pledged that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury, if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
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Original:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, acquired both state and federal government funding in a fradulent manner to the amount of $1.125 million Australian . Defence laywers pledged that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury, if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
Revised:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, acquired both state and federal government funding in a fradulent manner to the amount of . Defence laywers pledged that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury, if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
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Original:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, acquired both state and federal government funding in a fradulent manner to the amount of $1.125 million Australian . Defence laywers pledged that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury, if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
Revised:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, acquired both state and federal government funding in a fradulent manner to the amount of $1.125 million Australian . Defence lawyers pledged that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury, if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
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Original:  While prosecutors maintains that if the woman was expected to remove her covering, than she would not be called as a wittness .
Revised:  While prosecutors maintains that if the woman was expected to remove her covering, than she would not be called as a witness .
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Original:  Submissions were made today to district court judge, Shaun Deane by both prosecution and defence lawyers regarding whether a woman can give evidence about a fraud case in front of a jury, while wearing the traditional covering.
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Original: Submissions were made today to district court judge, Shaun Deane by both prosecution and defence lawyers regarding whether a woman can give evidence about a fraud case in front of a jury, while wearing the traditional covering.
Revised: District court judge, Shaun Deane by both prosecution and defence lawyers regarding whether a woman can give evidence about a fraud case in front of a jury, while wearing the traditional covering.
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Original:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, acquired both state and federal government funding in a fraudulent manner to the amount of  . Defence lawyers argued that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
Revised:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, were accused of acquiring both federal and state funding in a fraudulent manner to the amount of . Defence lawyers argued that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
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Original:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, acquired both state and federal government funding in a fraudulent manner to the amount of  . Defence lawyers argued that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
Revised:  The woman was set to testify as to whether the Muslim Ladies College of Australia and its director, Anwar Sayed, acquired both state and federal government funding in a fraudulent manner to the amount of . Defence lawyers claim that valuable facial cues could be lost or hidden from the jury if the woman was to wear the Burqa while on the stand.
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Original: A criminal investigation has begun in Edinburgh after three children were killed in a fire at a three story terraced house just before 3pm yesterday.
Revised: A criminal investigation has begun in Edinburgh after three children were killed in a fire at a three storey terraced house just before 3pm yesterday.
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Original:  According to Detective Superintendant Allan Jones the mother, Theresa Riggi, and her three children had been living in Edinburgh for little over a month since they were reported missing from their home in Skene, Aberdeenshire last month.
Revised:  According to Detective Superintendent Allan Jones the mother, Theresa Riggi, and her three children had been living in Edinburgh for little over a month since they were reported missing from their home in Skene, Aberdeenshire last month.
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Original:  A criminal investigation has begun in Edinburgh after three children were killed in a fire at a three storey terraced house just before 3pm yesterday.
Revised: Police say that the fire may not have caused the deaths, and are treating them as suspicious (pictured: Lothian and Borders Police headquarters in Edinburgh) A criminal investigation has begun in Edinburgh after three children were killed in a fire at a three storey terraced house just before 3pm yesterday.
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Original:  Neighbors have reported that they heard screaming from inside the house and one source said that when they found the victims lying dead in the living room it was "a horrific scene."
Revised:  Neighbours have reported that they heard screaming from inside the house and one source said that when they found the victims lying dead in the living room it was "a horrific scene."
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Original:  However reports that the children died before the fire broke out have not been confirmed by official sources and only reports by neighbors and others at the scene have indicated this.
Revised:  However reports that the children died before the fire broke out have not been confirmed by official sources and only reports by neighbours and others at the scene have indicated this.
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Original:  It is believed that Mrs Riggi may have turned on the gas, and that a neighbor smelled the fumes and called the emergency services, which may have led to the original report of a gas explosion.
Revised:  It is believed that Mrs Riggi may have turned on the gas, and that a neighbour smelled the fumes and called the emergency services, which may have led to the original report of a gas explosion.
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Original:  Tributes of flowers have been left close to the scene with cards of sympathy and condolences        
Revised:  Tributes of flowers have been left close to the scene with cards of sympathy and condolences . 
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Original:  Good to keep the practising up." Zimbabwean authorities had reportedly not told any other governmental departments, resulting in relatives inquiring with Air Zimbabwe as to what had happened.
Revised:  Good to keep the practising up." Those behind the staged accident had reportedly not told any other governmental departments, resulting in relatives inquiring with Air Zimbabwe as to what had happened.
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Original: File:Royal.brunei.airlines.b767.arp.jpg|A Boeing 767, similar to the aircraft authorities reported was involved in the 'accident' . ]] On Thursday, Zimbabwean officials informed the media that an Air Zimbabwe Boeing 767 aircraft carrying 250 people had crashed at Harare International Airport, before they announced the reports were false and the incident had in fact been a drill to simulate the occurence of such an event.
Revised: File:Royal.brunei.airlines.b767.arp.jpg|A Boeing 767, similar to the aircraft authorities reported was involved in the 'accident' ]] On Thursday, Zimbabwean officials informed the media that an Air Zimbabwe Boeing 767 aircraft carrying 250 people had crashed at Harare International Airport, before they announced the reports were false and the incident had in fact been a drill to simulate the occurence of such an event.
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Original:  Fox said that Lythgoe would continue as a judge and executive producer of So You Think You Can Dance   
Revised:  Fox said that Lythgoe would continue as a judge and executive producer of So You Think You Can Dance . 
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Original:  It was the first time ever for the North Koreans to qualify for the Cup phase, and the team gave up the win three times .
Revised:  It was the North Koreans to qualify for the Cup phase, and the team gave up the win three times .
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Original:  It was the first time ever for the North Koreans to qualify for the Cup phase, and the team gave up the win three times .
Revised:  It was the first time ever for the North Koreans had qualified for the World Cup finals .
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Original:  Like their North Korean counterparts who lost 7 goals to nil against Portugal, the Mexicans had suffered a heavy defeat of 6 goals to 0 against Germany
Revised:  Like their North Korean counterparts who lost 7 –0 against Portugal, the Mexicans had suffered a heavy defeat of 6 goals to 0 against Germany
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Original:  Like their North Korean counterparts who lost 7 goals to nil against Portugal, the Mexicans had suffered a heavy defeat of 6 goals to 0 against Germany
Revised:  Like their North Korean counterparts who lost 7 goals to nil against Portugal, the Mexicans had suffered a heavy defeat against Germany, losing 6 goals to 0 against Germany
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Original:  Like their North Korean counterparts who lost 7 goals to nil against Portugal, the Mexicans had suffered a heavy defeat of 6 goals to 0 against Germany
Revised:  Like their North Korean counterparts who lost 7 goals to nil against Portugal, the Mexicans had suffered a heavy defeat of 6 –0
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Original: Bob, a dude with a beard was drinking Pepsi and he said "I love pepsi".
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Original:  Later predictions by NOAA downgraded the hurricane to a strong Category 4, and it later weakend to a Category 2.
Revised:  Later predictions by NOAA downgraded the hurricane to a strong Category 4, and it later weakened to a Category 2.
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Original:  Both Harrison and Stimson were members of Skull and Bones Three days later, another atomic bomb  "Fat Man", was dropped on nearby Nagasaki.
Revised:  Three days later, another atomic bomb "Fat Man", was dropped on nearby Nagasaki.
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Original:  Both Harrison and Stimson were members of Skull and Bones Three days later, another atomic bomb  "Fat Man", was dropped on nearby Nagasaki.
Revised:  Both Harrison and Stimson were members of Skull and Bones Three days later, another atomic bomb , "Fat Man", was dropped on nearby Nagasaki.
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Original:  The Japanese Government surrendered unconditionally on 15 August , and signed the formal surrender on the USS Missouri on 2 September in Tokyo Bay.
Revised:  The Japanese Government surrendered unconditionally on August 15 , and signed the formal surrender on the USS Missouri on 2 September in Tokyo Bay.
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Original:  The Japanese Government surrendered unconditionally on 15 August , and signed the formal surrender on the USS Missouri on 2 September in Tokyo Bay.
Revised:  The Japanese Government surrendered unconditionally on 15 August , and signed the formal surrender on the USS Missouri on September 2 in Tokyo Bay.
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Original:  The atomic bomb, code-named "Little Boy", was dropped on Hiroshima at precisely 08:15 local time on August 6, 1945 by the specially converted United States Army Air Force B-29 Superfortress  Enola Gay.
Revised:  The atomic bomb, code-named "Little Boy", was dropped on Hiroshima at precisely 08:15 local time on August 6, 1945 by the specially converted United States Army Air Force B-29 Superfortress bomber Enola Gay.
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Original:  United Nation's secretary-general Ban Ki-moon, who was also attending this ceremony for the first time said " " Together, we are on a journey from ground zero to global zero -- a world free of weapons of mass destruction, and that is the only sane path to a safer world.
Revised:  United Nation's secretary-general Ban Ki-moon, who was also attending this ceremony for the first time said " Together, we are on a journey from ground zero to global zero -- a world free of weapons of mass destruction, and that is the only sane path to a safer world.
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Original:  United Nation's secretary-general Ban Ki-moon, who was also attending this ceremony for the first time said " " Together, we are on a journey from ground zero to global zero -- a world free of weapons of mass destruction, and that is the only sane path to a safer world.
Revised:  United Nation's secretary-general Ban Ki-moon, who was also attending this ceremony for the first time said " " Together, we are on a journey from ground zero to global zero - a world free of weapons of mass destruction, and that is the only sane path to a safer world.
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Original:  The recommendation to drop the atomic bomb without warning was made by an eight-man committee headed by George Harrison who was Secretary of War Henry Stimson's special assistant for matters relating to the development of the atomic bomb.
Revised:  The recommendation to drop the atomic bomb without warning was made by an eight-man committee headed by George Harrison , who was US Secretary of War Henry Stimson's special assistant for matters relating to the development of the atomic bomb.
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Original: The atomic bomb, code-named "Little Boy", was dropped on Hiroshima at precisely 08:15 local time on August 6, 1945 by the specially converted United States Army Air Force B-29 Superfortress bomber Enola Gay piloted by Colonel Paul Tibbets, who later retired as a brigadier general  . Diplomats from 75 countries attended this anniversary including the United States, United Kingdom and France for the first time.
Revised: The atomic bomb, code-named "Little Boy", was dropped on Hiroshima at precisely 08:15 local time on August 6, 1945 by the specially converted United States Army Air Force B-29 Superfortress bomber Enola Gay piloted by Colonel Paul Tibbets, who later retired as a brigadier general in the United States Air Force . Diplomats from 75 countries attended this anniversary including the United States, United Kingdom and France for the first time.
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