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Original: "The Frugalware Development Team" describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose linux [ sic ]  distribution, designed for intermediate users (who are not afraid of text mode)."
Revised: "The Frugalware Development Team" describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ sic ] distribution, designed for intermediate users (who are not afraid of text mode)."
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Original:  Miklós Vajna: Our package manager is called  pacman , and its primariy purpose is to install binary packages.
Revised:  Miklós Vajna: Our package manager is called pacman , and its primary purpose is to install binary packages.
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Original:  Frugalware is free, but maintaining it needs hardware, mirrors,  money.
Revised:  Frugalware is free, but maintaining it needs hardware, mirrors, and money.
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Original:  We got several donations already ( buildservers ), and we countinuously need them.
Revised:  We got several donations already ( build servers ), and we countinuously need them.
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Original:  If a corporation want to sponsor us, I think that is totally O.K. :-) Wikinews: What is Arch Linux in relationship to your project?
Revised:  If a corporation wants to sponsor us, I think that is totally O.K. :-) Wikinews: What is Arch Linux in relationship to your project?
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Original:  And how do their efforts fit into your gameplan.
Revised:  And how do their efforts fit into your game plan?
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Original: " The Frugalware Development Team " describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] inux distribution, designed for intermediate users ( who are not afraid of text mode ) ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
Revised:  The Frugalware Development Team " describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] inux distribution, designed for intermediate users ( who are not afraid of text mode ) ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
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Original: " The Frugalware Development Team " describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] inux distribution, designed for intermediate users ( who are not afraid of text mode ) ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
Revised: " The Frugalware Development Team describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] inux distribution, designed for intermediate users ( who are not afraid of text mode ) ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
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Original: " The Frugalware Development Team " describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] inux distribution, designed for intermediate users ( who are not afraid of text mode ) ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
Revised: " The Frugalware Development Team " describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] distribution, designed for intermediate users ( who are not afraid of text mode ) ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
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Original: " The Frugalware Development Team " describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] inux distribution, designed for intermediate users ( who are not afraid of text mode ) ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
Revised: " The Frugalware Development Team " describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] inux distribution, designed for intermediate users who are not afraid of text mode ) ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
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Original: " The Frugalware Development Team " describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] inux distribution, designed for intermediate users ( who are not afraid of text mode ) ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
Revised: " The Frugalware Development Team " describes ­­Frugalware as a "general purpose [ L ] inux distribution, designed for intermediate users ( who are not afraid of text mode ." Frugalware also plans to offer a live CD with desktop options, to be developed by one of its teams.
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Original:  Frugalware is free, but maintaining it needs hardware, mirrors, and money.
Revised:  Frugalware is free, but maintaining it needs hardware, mirrors, money.
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Original:  If a corporation wants to sponsor us, I think that is totally O.K. :-)
Revised:  If a corporation want to sponsor us, I think that is totally O.K. :-)
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Original: The Simpsons have been on television for 17 seasons and FOX confirms that it will run at least two more series .
Revised: The Simpsons have been on television for 17 seasons and FOX confirms that it will run at least two more seasons .
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Original: The Simpsons have been on television for 17 seasons and FOX confirms that it will run at least two more seasons.
Revised: The Simpsons has been on television for 17 seasons and FOX confirms that it will run at least two more seasons.
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Original: American multi-billionaire Donald Trump is to build a massive golf complex on an 800-acre site just north of Aberdeen, Scotland , it was announced recently . Speaking last night from the Trump Tower in New York, Trump said that the development will be akin to a "homecoming" for the property tycoon, his mother being from the Western Isles of Scotland.
Revised: American multi-billionaire Donald Trump has announced plans to build a massive golf complex on an 800-acre site just north of Aberdeen, Scotland , it was announced recently . Speaking last night from the Trump Tower in New York, Trump said that the development will be akin to a "homecoming" for the property tycoon, his mother being from the Western Isles of Scotland.
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Original: American multi-billionaire Donald Trump is to build a massive golf complex on an 800-acre site just north of Aberdeen, Scotland , it was announced recently . Speaking last night from the Trump Tower in New York, Trump said that the development will be akin to a "homecoming" for the property tycoon, his mother being from the Western Isles of Scotland.
Revised: American multi-billionaire Donald Trump is to build a massive golf complex on an 800-acre site just north of Aberdeen, Scotland . Speaking last night from the Trump Tower in New York, Trump said that the development will be akin to a "homecoming" for the property tycoon, his mother being from the Western Isles of Scotland.
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Original: American multi-billionaire Donald Trump is to build a massive golf complex on an 800-acre site just north of Aberdeen, Scotland , it was announced recently . Speaking last night from the Trump Tower in New York, Trump said that the development will be akin to a "homecoming" for the property tycoon, his mother being from the Western Isles of Scotland.
Revised: American multi-billionaire Donald Trump is to build a massive golf complex on an 800-acre site just north of Aberdeen, Scotland , it was announced recently . Speaking last night from the Trump Tower in New York, Trump said that the development will be akin to a "homecoming" for him. The property tycoon's mother is from the Western Isles of Scotland.
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Original:  The £300m project at Menie in Aberdeenshire will include both a links course and an inland course,  a 400-bedroom hotel as well as a golfing academy and holiday homes , all with the intention of attracting the Open Championship to the site, officially dubbed Trump International Golf Links, Scotland.
Revised:  The £300m project at Menie in Aberdeenshire will include both a links course and an inland course, and a 400-bedroom hotel as well as a golfing academy and holiday homes , all with the intention of attracting the Open Championship to the site, officially dubbed Trump International Golf Links, Scotland.
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Original:  The £300m project at Menie in Aberdeenshire will include both a links course and an inland course,  a 400-bedroom hotel as well as a golfing academy and holiday homes , all with the intention of attracting the Open Championship to the site, officially dubbed Trump International Golf Links, Scotland.
Revised:  The £300m project at Menie in Aberdeenshire will include both a links course and an inland course, a 400-bedroom hotel as well as a golfing academy and holiday homes . The facilities are being built with the intention of attracting the Open Championship to the site, officially dubbed Trump International Golf Links, Scotland.
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Original:  The location is coastal, partially covered with fields but also partly with sand-dunes . Regarding the land, Donald Trump said : "As soon as I saw it there was no question about it.
Revised:  Fields and sand-dunes . Regarding the land, Donald Trump said : "As soon as I saw it there was no question about it.
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Original:  The location is coastal, partially covered with fields but also partly with sand-dunes . Regarding the land, Donald Trump said : "As soon as I saw it there was no question about it.
Revised:  The location is coastal, partially covered with fields but also partly with sand-dunes make up the landscape of the coastal site. Trump said of the location, "As soon as I saw it there was no question about it.
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Original:  The billionaire goes on to claim that the complex, set to be his only development outwith the United States, would be the "best course in the world".
Revised:  The billionaire claims that the complex, set to be his only development outwith the United States, would be the "best course in the world".
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Original:  The billionaire goes on to claim that the complex, set to be his only development outwith the United States, would be the "best course in the world".
Revised:  The billionaire goes on to claim that the complex, set to be his only development outwith the United States, will be the "best course in the world".
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Original:  Local and national political figures, including Scottish First Minister Jack McConnell, have welcomed the announcement with open arms, due to the almost-guaranteed massive economic boost, expected to be in the region of £157m  within the first ten years.
Revised:  Local and national political figures, including Scottish First Minister Jack McConnell, have welcomed the announcement with open arms, due to the almost-guaranteed massive economic boost, expected to be in the region of £157m to the region's economy within the first ten years.
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Original:  Scottish tourism company VisitScotland is also optimistic, with an influx of international visitors expected to play on (or simply visit) the important golfing site.
Revised:  Scottish tourism company VisitScotland is also optimistic, expecting an influx of international visitors expected to play on (or simply visit) the important golfing site.
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Original:  Scottish tourism company VisitScotland is also optimistic, with an influx of international visitors expected to play on (or simply visit) the important golfing site.
Revised:  Scottish tourism company VisitScotland is also optimistic, with an influx of international visitors to play on (or simply visit) the important golfing site.
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Original:  The A90 road running past the site is set to be expanded in the near future , so road links will be improved, and an expansion of Aberdeen Airport , costing approximately £60m, will allow for vastly increased international air links, akin to those operated using Boeing 767 aircraft.
Revised:  The A90 road running past the site in the near future , so road links will be improved, and an expansion of Aberdeen Airport , costing approximately £60m, will allow for vastly increased international air links, akin to those operated using Boeing 767 aircraft.
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Original:  The A90 road running past the site is set to be expanded in the near future , so road links will be improved, and an expansion of Aberdeen Airport , costing approximately £60m, will allow for vastly increased international air links, akin to those operated using Boeing 767 aircraft.
Revised:  The A90 road running past the site is set to be expanded in the near future will enable more road traffic to and around the area. An £60m expansion of Aberdeen Airport , costing approximately £60m, will allow for vastly increased international air links, akin to those operated using Boeing 767 aircraft.
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Original:  The A90 road running past the site is set to be expanded in the near future , so road links will be improved, and an expansion of Aberdeen Airport , costing approximately £60m, will allow for vastly increased international air links, akin to those operated using Boeing 767 aircraft.
Revised:  The A90 road running past the site is set to be expanded in the near future , so road links will be improved, and an expansion of Aberdeen Airport will also allow for vastly increased international air links, akin to those operated using Boeing 767 aircraft.
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Original: , — 's Stingers, the , completed their five-game test series in , Australia winning all five match against .
Revised: , — 's Stingers, the , completed their five-game test series in , Australia winning all five matches against the .
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Original:  The test is part of the preparations for the team's appearance.
Revised:  The test is part of preparations for the team's appearance.
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Original:  On the far left is Bronwen Knox, then Zoe Arancini, Melissa Rippon, Rowena Webster, Hannah Buckling.alt=woman in water lunging for the ball|An Australian lunges for the ball during the fourth test |leftalt=woman in water with a ball|Melissa Rippon passes the ball in the fifth game|thumb With comfortable wins in all five matches, showing at least a six goal or more advantage in each game, the test series was the first time Australia's women competed against Great Britain in six years.
Revised:  On the far left is Bronwen Knox, then Zoe Arancini, Melissa Rippon, Rowena Webster, Hannah Buckling.alt=woman in water lunging for the ball|An Australian lunges for the ball during the fourth test |leftalt=woman in water with a ball|Melissa Rippon passes the ball in the fifth game|thumb With comfortable wins in all five matches, showing at least a six goal or more advantage in each game, the test series was the first time Australia's women competed against the UK in six years.
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Original:  of the seventeen players brought into the Australian training camp running this test series, only thirteen of them can expect an opportunity to travel to London to compete at the .
Revised:  of the seventeen players brought into the Australian training camp running this test series, only thirteen of them can expect an opportunity to travel to London to compete in the Olympics .
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Original:  In contrast, through out the series, Great Britain lacked a quality long passing game and instead relied on short passes from the perimeter of play where they were faced with less one-on-one coverage.
Revised:  In contrast, through out the series, the UK lacked a quality long passing game and instead relied on short passes from the perimeter of play where they were faced with less one-on-one coverage.
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Original:  The last game of the series also saw several turn overs , and poor shooting on the part of Great Britain , with many shots going above or to the side of the net, or the shot clock running out.
Revised:  The last game of the series also saw several turn overs and poor shooting on the part of Great Britain , with many shots going above or to the side of the net, or the shot clock running out.
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Original:  The last game of the series also saw several turn overs , and poor shooting on the part of Great Britain , with many shots going above or to the side of the net, or the shot clock running out.
Revised:  The last game of the series also saw several turn overs , and poor shooting on the part of the UK , with many shots going above or to the side of the net, or the shot clock running out.
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Original:  Australia won all of the games of the test series, with scores of 13–5 in the first test last Tuesday, 14–4 in the second test last Thursday, 15–6 in the third test on Sunday, and 14–8 in the fourth test on Monday and 14–3 in the last test match Tuesday.
Revised:  Australia won all of the games of the test series, with scores of 13–5 in the first test last Tuesday, 14–4 in the second test last Thursday, 15–6 in the third test on Sunday, 14–8 in the fourth test on Monday and 14–3 in the last test match Tuesday.
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Original:  On the far left is Bronwen Knox, then Zoe Arancini, Melissa Rippon, Rowena Webster, Hannah Buckling.alt=woman in water lunging for the ball|An Australian lunges for the ball during the fourth test |leftalt=woman in water with a ball|Melissa Rippon passes the ball in the fifth game|thumb With comfortable wins in all five matches, showing at least a six goal or more advantage in each game, the test series was the first time Australia's women competed against the UK in six years.
Revised:  On the far left is Bronwen Knox, then Zoe Arancini, Melissa Rippon, Rowena Webster, Hannah Buckling.alt=woman in water lunging for the ball|An Australian lunges for the ball during the fourth test |leftalt=woman in water with a ball|Melissa Rippon passes the ball in the fifth game|thumb With comfortable wins in all five matches, showing an advantage of at least six goals in each game, the test series was the first time Australia's women competed against the UK in six years.
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Original: , — 's Stingers, the , completed their five-game test series in , Australia winning all five matches against the .
Revised: , — 's Stingers, the , completed their five-game test series in , Australia winning all five matches against .
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Original:  On the far left is Bronwen Knox, then Zoe Arancini, Melissa Rippon, Rowena Webster, Hannah Buckling.alt=woman in water lunging for the ball|An Australian lunges for the ball during the fourth test |leftalt=woman in water with a ball|Melissa Rippon passes the ball in the fifth game|thumb With comfortable wins in all five matches, showing an advantage of at least six goals in each game, the test series was the first time Australia's women competed against the UK in six years.
Revised:  On the far left is Bronwen Knox, then Zoe Arancini, Melissa Rippon, Rowena Webster, Hannah Buckling.alt=woman in water lunging for the ball|An Australian lunges for the ball during the fourth test |leftalt=woman in water with a ball|Melissa Rippon passes the ball in the fifth game|thumb With comfortable wins in all five matches, showing an advantage of at least six goals in each game, the test series was the first time Australia's women competed against Great Britain in six years.
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Original: Australia won all of the games of the test series, with scores of 13–5 in the first test last Tuesday, 14–4 in the second test last Thursday, 15–6 in the third test on Saturday, 14–8 in the fourth test on Monday and 14–3 in the last test match Tuesday .
Revised: Australia won all of the games of the test series, with scores of 13–5 in the first test last Tuesday, 14–4 in the second test last Thursday, 15–6 in the third test on Saturday, 14–8 in the fourth test yesterday (Monday) and 14–3 in the last test match Tuesday .
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Original: , —  's Stingers, the , completed their five-game test series in , Australia winning all five matches against  .
Revised: , — Australia 's Stingers, the , completed their five-game test series in , Australia winning all five matches against .
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Original:  Sun has started an open source community, OpenSparc.net, to promote the use of the T1 design in various solutions, ranging from embedded devices to computer architecture course
Revised:  Sun has started an open source community, OpenSparc.net, to promote the use of the T1 design in various solutions, ranging from embedded devices to computer architecture courses
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Original:  The source code  used to construct the processor, written in Verilog, is available for download.
Revised:  The source code used to construct the processor, is available for download.
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Original:  Sun has started an open source community, OpenSparc.net, to promote the use of the T1 design in various solutions , ranging from embedded devices to computer architecture courses
Revised:  Sun has started an open-source community, OpenSparc.net, to promote the use of the T1 design in various solutions , ranging from embedded devices to computer architecture courses
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Original:  Sun has started an open source community, OpenSparc.net, to promote the use of the T1 design in various solutions , ranging from embedded devices to computer architecture courses
Revised:  Sun has started an open source community, OpenSparc.net, to promote the use of the T1 design in various places , ranging from embedded devices to computer architecture courses
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Original: On March 21, 2006, Sun Microsystems released the source code model of its newest processor, the UltraSPARC T1.
Revised: On March 21, 2006, Sun Microsystems released the source code for its newest processor, the UltraSPARC T1.
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Original: w:Open source hardware| Open Source Hardware has been gaining momentum since 2002, when Kofi Annan issued a challenge to technology companies.
Revised:  Open Source Hardware has been gaining momentum since 2002, when Kofi Annan issued a challenge to technology companies.
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Original: The American manufacturing giant Proctor & Gamble   is to acquire Gillette for US$57 billion , the company  which owns brands such as Ariel & Tide washing powder, Max Factor cosmetics, Pringles potato crisps (chips) and Hugo Boss & Lacoste perfumes is buy the company through share acquisitions.
Revised: The American manufacturing giant Proctor & Gamble is to acquire Gillette for US$57 billion . P which owns brands such as Ariel & Tide washing powder, Max Factor cosmetics, Pringles potato crisps (chips) and Hugo Boss & Lacoste perfumes is buy the company through share acquisitions.
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Original: The American manufacturing giant Proctor & Gamble   is to acquire Gillette for US$57 billion , the company  which owns brands such as Ariel & Tide washing powder, Max Factor cosmetics, Pringles potato crisps (chips) and Hugo Boss & Lacoste perfumes is buy the company through share acquisitions.
Revised: The American manufacturing giant Proctor & Gamble is to acquire Gillette for US$57 billion , the company which owns brands such as Ariel & Tide washing powder, Max Factor cosmetics, Pringles potato crisps (chips) and Hugo Boss & Lacoste perfumes , is to buy the company through share acquisitions.
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Original:  Gillette which makes such names as Gillette razors, Oral B dental care & Duracell batteries, has growing problems with the growth in private labels and squeezing profits by the large supermarkets.
Revised:  Gillette which makes such names as Gillette razors, Oral B dental care & Duracell batteries, has growing problems with the growth of private labels and squeezing profits by the large supermarkets.
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