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Original:   In response, the Red Cross of South Korea has offered aid which was turned away by Pyongyang, whose North Korean counterpart responded with "thanks for Seoul's offer" but said "it will handle the recovery efforts from recent floods by itself."
Revised:  In response, the Red Cross of South Korea has offered aid which was turned down by Pyongyang, whose North Korean counterpart responded with "thanks for Seoul's offer" but said "it will handle the recovery efforts from recent floods by itself."
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Original: However, The South Korean aid organisation Good Friends estimates that around 10,000 are dead or missing, with 1.5 million people homeless.
Revised: However, The South Korean aid organisation estimates that around 10,000 are dead or missing, with 1.5 million people homeless.
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Original:  North Korea has also refused other international offers of help, including from the World Food Programme . Private groups in South Korea have announced plans to send aid shipments, which are expected to be accepted by DPRK  
Revised:  North Korea has also refused other international offers of help, including from the . Private groups in South Korea have announced plans to send aid shipments, which are expected to be accepted by DPRK 
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Original:  North Korea has also refused other international offers of help, including from the World Food Programme . Private groups in South Korea have announced plans to send aid shipments, which are expected to be accepted by DPRK  
Revised:  North Korea has also refused other international offers of help, including from the World Food Programme . Private groups in South Korea have announced plans to send aid shipments, which are expected to be accepted by DPRK . 
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Original: Though the official position of the Israeli government do not support a cease fire between Israel and Hizbollah the leader of the Degel Hatorah political party as well as the ultra-Orthodox Lithuanian community in Israel expressed his support of a cease fire.
Revised: Though the official position of the Israeli government do not support a cease fire between Israel and Hizbollah the leader of the Degel HaTorah political party as well as the ultra-Orthodox Lithuanian community in Israel expressed his support of a cease fire.
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Original:  We will bomb Tel Aviv." Portrait of Hizbollah leader Sayyed Hassan Nasrallah Nasrallah also offered his first gesture toward ceasefire.
Revised:  We will bomb Tel Aviv." Nasrallah also offered his first gesture toward ceasefire.
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Original: US Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice and Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld have approved a plan to provide training and eqipment to the Lebanese military.
Revised: US Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice and Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld have approved a plan to provide training and equipment to the Lebanese military.
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Original:  The goal of such a service would be to allow Lebanon to more easily recapture areas of southern Lebanon currently embroiled in the conflict between Israel and Hezbollah , thus preventing instability in the region.
Revised:  The goal would be to allow Lebanon to more easily recapture areas of southern Lebanon currently embroiled in the conflict between Israel and Hezbollah , thus preventing instability in the region.
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Original:  The goal of such a service would be to allow Lebanon to more easily recapture areas of southern Lebanon currently embroiled in the conflict between Israel and Hezbollah , thus preventing instability in the region.
Revised:  The goal of such a service would be to allow Lebanon to take control of its own territory once fighting between Israel and Hezbollah , thus preventing instability in the region.
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Original:  The goal of such a service would be to allow Lebanon to more easily recapture areas of southern Lebanon currently embroiled in the conflict between Israel and Hezbollah , thus preventing instability in the region.
Revised:  The goal of such a service would be to allow Lebanon to more easily recapture areas of southern Lebanon currently embroiled in the conflict between Israel and Hezbollah had eased.
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Original:  Rice was quoted to say, “ We need to end the hostilities in a way that points forward a direction for a sustainable peace.
Revised:  Rice was quoted as saying, " We need to end the hostilities in a way that points forward a direction for a sustainable peace.
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Original: The Hezbollah raid into Israel, which resulted in the capture of two Iraeli soldiers and the deaths of seven?
Revised: The Hezbollah raid into Israel, which resulted in the capture of two Israeli soldiers and the deaths of seven?
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Original:  others and sparked off the current conflict, was to ransom the captured for the exchange of Israeli-held  prisoners
Revised:  others and sparked the current conflict, was to ransom the captured for the exchange of Israeli-held prisoners
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Original:  others and sparked the current conflict, was to ransom the captured for the exchange of Israeli-held Lebanese prisoners  
Revised:  others and sparked the current conflict, was to ransom the captured for the exchange of Israeli-held Lebanese prisoners . 
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Original:  The movie will be launched in 2008 
Revised:  The movie will be launched in 2008. 
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Original: date|August 4, 2006 Police in Jammu and Kashmir have arrested a Leashkar-e-Toiba operative in the Poonch district of the state.
Revised:  Police in Jammu and Kashmir have arrested a Leashkar-e-Toiba operative in the Poonch district of the state.
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Original:  Soon after his arrest, the LeT operative was taken to the Joint Interrogation Centre (JIC) in Poonch and questioned by officilas from both the Mumbai and Kashmir police forces.
Revised:  After his arrest, the LeT operative was taken to the Joint Interrogation Centre (JIC) in Poonch and questioned by officilas from both the Mumbai and Kashmir police forces.
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Original:  During preliminary investigations, security agencies found that Hameed had been been deployed in Mumbai by the Lashkar-e-Toiba to establish a network in the city and aid the militant organisation in its activities in India's commercial capital. hameed had been close to Abu Usama, the "Divisional Commander" of the LeT in Poonch and is believed to have received direct instructions from the organisation's top leaders across the border in Pakistan to carry out the bombings.
Revised:  During preliminary investigations, security agencies found that Hameed had been been deployed in Mumbai by the Lashkar-e-Toiba to establish a network in the city and aid the militant organisation in its activities in India's commercial capital. Hameed had been close to Abu Usama, the "Divisional Commander" of the LeT in Poonch and is believed to have received direct instructions from the organisation's top leaders across the border in Pakistan to carry out the bombings.
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Original:  Hameed has already revealed some vital information about the bombings and more arrests are likely to take place in the Baramulla and Poonch districts of the state, police say  
Revised:  Hameed has already revealed some vital information about the bombings and more arrests are likely to take place in the Baramulla and Poonch districts of the state, police say . 
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Original:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the Jammu & Kashmir State Police raided a hideout in the Sanai Potha area of Surankote and apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed, in connection with the July 7 blasts in Mumbai which killed 200 commuters on the city's  rail network.
Revised:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the Jammu & Kashmir State Police raided a hideout in the Sanai Potha area of Surankote and apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed, in connection with the July 7 train bombings in Mumbai which killed 200 commuters on the city's rail network.
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Original:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the Jammu & Kashmir State Police raided a hideout in the Sanai Potha area of Surankote and apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed, in connection with the July 7 blasts in Mumbai which killed 200 commuters on the city's  rail network.
Revised:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the Jammu & Kashmir State Police raided a hideout in the Sanai Potha area of Surankote and apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed, in connection with the July 7 blasts in Mumbai which killed 200 commuters on the city's commuter rail network.
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Original: Police in Jammu and Kashmir have arrested a Leashkar-e-Toiba (LeT) operative in the Poonch district of the state.
Revised: Police in Jammu and Kashmir have arrested a Lashkar-e-Toiba (LeT) operative in the Poonch district of the state.
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Original: After his arrest, the LeT operative was taken to the Joint Interrogation Centre (JIC) in Poonch and questioned by officilas from both the Mumbai and Kashmir police forces.
Revised: After his arrest, the LeT operative was taken to the Joint Interrogation Centre (JIC) in Poonch and questioned by officials from both the Mumbai and Kashmir police forces.
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Original: Police in Jammu and Kashmir have arrested a  Lashkar-e-Toiba(LeT) operative in the Poonch district of the state.
Revised: Police in Jammu and Kashmir have arrested a Lashkar-e-Toiba(LeT) in the Poonch district of the state.
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Original:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the Jammu  Kashmir State Police raided a hideout in the Sanai Potha area of Surankote and apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed, in connection with the July 7 train bombings in Mumbai which killed 200 commuters on the city's commuter rail network.
Revised:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the Jammu and Kashmir State Police raided a hideout in the Sanai Potha area of Surankote and apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed, in connection with the July 7 train bombings in Mumbai which killed 200 commuters on the city's commuter rail network.
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Original: Police in Jammu and Kashmir have arrested a member of the banned islamic goup Lashkar-e-Toiba (LeT) in the  Poonch district of the  state.
Revised: An alleged member of the banned islamic goup Lashkar-e-Toiba (LeT) in the Poonch district of the state.
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Original: Police in Jammu and Kashmir have arrested a member of the banned islamic goup Lashkar-e-Toiba (LeT) in the  Poonch district of the  state.
Revised: Police in Jammu and Kashmir have arrested a member of the banned islamic goup Lashkar-e-Toiba (LeT) in the Poonch district of the K) state.
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Original:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the Jammu and Kashmir State Police raided a hideout in the Sanai Potha area of Surankote and  apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed , in connection with the July 7 train bombings in Mumbai which killed 200 commuters on the city's commuter rail network.
Revised:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the J apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed , in connection with the July 7 train bombings in Mumbai which killed 200 commuters on the city's commuter rail network.
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Original:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the Jammu and Kashmir State Police raided a hideout in the Sanai Potha area of Surankote and  apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed , in connection with the July 7 train bombings in Mumbai which killed 200 commuters on the city's commuter rail network.
Revised:  A Special Investigation Team (SIT) of the Mumbai police aided by the Counter-Intelligence Wing of the Jammu and Kashmir State Police raided a hideout in the Sanai Potha area of Surankote and apprehended the militant, identified as Abdul Hameed 
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Original:  After his arrest, the LeT operative was taken to the Joint Interrogation Centre (JIC) in Poonch and questioned by officials from both the Mumbai and Kashmir police forces.
Revised:  . Hamed has been taken to the Joint Interrogation Centre (JIC) in Poonch and questioned by officials from both the Mumbai and Kashmir police forces.
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Original:  After his arrest, the LeT operative was taken to the Joint Interrogation Centre (JIC) in Poonch and questioned by officials from both the Mumbai and Kashmir police forces.
Revised:  After his arrest, the LeT operative was taken to the Joint Interrogation Centre (JIC) in Poonch for interrogation by the Mumbai and Kashmir police forces.
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Original:  A identity card provided to Hameed by a private security agency for which he was working in Mumbai was recovered from one of the blast sites at Matunga , which led to his subsequent identification and arrest.
Revised:  A identity card provided to him by a private security agency for which he was working in Mumbai was recovered from one of the blast sites at Matunga , which led to his subsequent identification and arrest.
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Original:  A identity card provided to Hameed by a private security agency for which he was working in Mumbai was recovered from one of the blast sites at Matunga , which led to his subsequent identification and arrest.
Revised:  A identity card provided to Hameed by a private security agency in Mumbai he worked for, which was recovered from one of the blast sites at Matunga , which led to his subsequent identification and arrest.
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Original:  During preliminary investigations, security agencies found that  Hameed had been been deployed in Mumbai by the Lashkar-e-Toiba to establish a network in the city and aid the militant organisation in its activities in India's commercial capital .
Revised:  During preliminary investigations, security agencies found that Hameed had been been deployed in Mumbai by the Lashkar-e-Toiba to establish a network in the city .
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Original:  After seeking a remand from the local court in Poonch, authorities will fly Hameed to Mumbai in a special aircraft for further interrogation.
Revised:  After seeking a remand from the local court in Poonch, authorities will fly Hameed to Mumbai for further interrogation.
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Original:  Hameed has already revealed some vital information about the bombings and more arrests are likely to take place in the Baramulla and Poonch districts of the state, police say   .
Revised:  Hameed has already revealed some vital information about the bombings and more arrests are likely to take place in the Baramulla and Poonch districts of the state, police say . .
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Original:  He vanished on 5 November 2000 after one of his friends drove him home from a party at around two 2 a.m  
Revised:  He vanished on 5 November 2000 after one of his friends drove him home from a party at around two 2 a.m . 
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Original:  He vanished on 5 November 2000 after one of his friends drove him home from a party at around two 2 a.m .
Revised:  He vanished on 5 November 2000 after one of his friends drove him home from a party at around two two o'clock in the morning .
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Original:  Mr Huff didn’t say how the truck got into the water, but he did say the vehicle could have veered off the rode .
Revised:  Mr Huff didn’t say how the truck got into the water, but he did say the vehicle could have veered off the road .
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Original:  He vanished on 5 November 2000 after one of his friends drove him home from a party at around two two o'clock in the morning.
Revised:  He vanished on 5 November 2000 after one of his friends drove him home from a party at around two o'clock in the morning.
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Original: A coroner revealed last week that Ryan Katcher, a missing Illinois student who  was found dead a few days ago, had died of drowning.
Revised: A coroner revealed last week that Ryan Katcher, a Illinois student who was found dead a few days ago, had died of drowning.
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Original: A coroner revealed last week that Ryan Katcher, a Illinois student who had been missing for five years , was found dead a few days ago, had died of drowning.
Revised: A coroner revealed last week that Ryan Katcher, a Illinois student who had been missing for five years and was found dead a few days ago, had died of drowning.
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Original:  The body of the 19 year-old , who vanished more than five years ago, was discovered in his pickup truck at the bottom of a lake in Illinois.
Revised:  The body of the 19 year-old was discovered in his pickup truck at the bottom of a lake in Illinois.
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Original:  It costs just £3.50 to download a copy of an original page from the book.
Revised:  It costs £3.50 to download a copy of an original page from the book.
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Original: The Domesday Book, which was completed in the eleventh century, can now be explored via the world wide web .
Revised: The Domesday Book, penned in the eleventh century, can now be explored via the world wide web .
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Original:  The document was commissioned by William the Conquerer in 1086 to allow him to see for himself the amount of land and resources owned in England, therefore enabling him to work out how much to tax his people .
Revised:  The document was commissioned by William the Conquerer in 1086 to tally the amount of land and resources owned in England, therefore enabling him to work out how much to tax his people .
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Original:  The document was commissioned by William the Conquerer in 1086 to allow him to see for himself the amount of land and resources owned in England, therefore enabling him to work out how much to tax his people .
Revised:  The document was commissioned by William the Conquerer in 1086 to allow him to see for himself the amount of land and resources owned throughout England. The findings were used to calculate taxes, and the wealth of the king .
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Original:  And from today, anyone with an internet connection and web browser can explore the book for free to see what life was like back in the past in any English village, town or city.
Revised:  From today, anyone with an internet connection and web browser can explore the book for free to see what life was like back in the past in any English village, town or city.
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Original:  And from today, anyone with an internet connection and web browser can explore the book for free to see what life was like back in the past in any English village, town or city.
Revised:  And from today, anyone with an Internet connection is now able to explore the book for free to see what life was like back in the past in any English village, town or city.
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Original:  And from today, anyone with an internet connection and web browser can explore the book for free to see what life was like back in the past in any English village, town or city.
Revised:  And from today, anyone with an internet connection and web browser can explore the book for free . A web browser can be used to find out what life was like back in the past in any English village, town or city.
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Original:  And from today, anyone with an internet connection and web browser can explore the book for free to see what life was like back in the past in any English village, town or city.
Revised:  And from today, anyone with an internet connection and web browser can explore the book for free to see what life was like in the past in any English village, town or city.
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Original:  It costs £3.50 to download a copy of an original page from the book .
Revised:  In addition, a person can download a copy of an original page from the book .
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Original:  It costs £3.50 to download a copy of an original page from the book .
Revised:  It costs £3.50 to download a copy of any page from the book .
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Original:  It costs £3.50 to download a copy of an original page from the book .
Revised:  It costs £3.50 to download a copy of an original page from the book for the fee of £3.50.
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Original: The Domesday Book was commissioned by William the Conquerer in 1086 to tally the amount of land and resources owned throughout England.
Revised: The book was commissioned by William the Conquerer in 1086 to tally the amount of land and resources owned throughout England.
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Original: The book was voted the “nation’s finest treasure” in 2005, however studies have found that thirteen percent of people believe the Domesday Book to be a chapter in the Bible .
Revised: The book was voted the “nation’s finest treasure” in 2005. But studies have found that thirteen percent of people believe the Domesday Book to be a chapter in the Bible .
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Original: Jenna O'Hea at an Olympic training camp last monthSuzy Batkovic and Abby Bishop at an Olympic training camp last month Yesterday, announced the final Olympic squads for the 2012 Summer Olympics ahead of a farewell series in the Melbourne area this weekend for both the and the . , , , , , , , , , ,  and earned a trip to London as members of the Opals 2012 Summer Olympics team.
Revised: Jenna O'Hea at an Olympic training camp last monthSuzy Batkovic and Abby Bishop at an Olympic training camp last month Yesterday, announced the final Olympic squads for the 2012 Summer Olympics ahead of a farewell series in the Melbourne area this weekend for both the and the . , , , , , , , , , , , and earned a trip to London as members of the Opals 2012 Summer Olympics team.
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Original: Jenna O'Hea at an Olympic training camp last monthSuzy Batkovic and Abby Bishop at an Olympic training camp last month Yesterday, announced the final Olympic squads for the 2012 Summer Olympics ahead of a farewell series in the Melbourne area this weekend for both the and the . , , , , , , , , , ,  and earned a trip to London as members of the Opals 2012 Summer Olympics team.
Revised: Jenna O'Hea at an Olympic training camp last monthSuzy Batkovic and Abby Bishop at an Olympic training camp last month Yesterday, announced the final Olympic squads for the 2012 Summer Olympics ahead of a farewell series in the Melbourne area this weekend for both the and the . , , , , , , , , , , and earned a trip to as members of the Opals 2012 Summer Olympics team.
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Original:  On the men's side  , , , , , , , , , , , and earned a trip to London.
Revised:  On the men's side , , , , , , , , , , , , and earned a trip to London.
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Original:  The zoo still remains open for business and cleanig efforts have been intensified.
Revised:  The zoo still remains open for business and cleaning efforts have been intensified.
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Original:  Assange alleges that sending him to Sweden will result in eventual extradition to America, to face charges over a 2010 incident in which Wikileaks released . Correa said that  matter centred around whether Assange would face the death penalty if sent to the US.
Revised:  Assange alleges that sending him to Sweden will result in eventual extradition to America, to face charges over a 2010 incident in which Wikileaks released . Correa said that the matter centred around whether Assange would face the death penalty if sent to the US.
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