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Original:  Comments to John Coates’ article in The Australian pose questions such as the impact of investment in elite sport:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “Has the advent of the funding of elite sport in Australia improved the health of young Australians over what it would have been without this funding?
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “Has the advent of the funding of elite sport in Australia improved the health of young Australians over what it would have been without this funding?
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Original: The Independent Sport Panel Report (Crawford Report) was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation on the future for Australian sport.
Revised: The Independent Sport Panel Report (Crawford Report) was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport.
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Original:  The President of the Australian Olympic Committee has criticised the Report, arguing for sustained funding to Olympic sport, and several elite sports people have joined that call .
Revised:  The President of the Australian Olympic Committee has criticised the Report, and several elite sports people have joined that call .
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Original:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging to notion that Australians benefit from high performing athletes in the Olympics more than if resources were allocated to participation before performance .
Revised:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging to beliefs that Australians benefit from high performing athletes in the Olympics more than if resources were allocated to participation before performance .
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Original:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging to notion that Australians benefit from high performing athletes in the Olympics more than if resources were allocated to participation before performance .
Revised:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging to notion that Australians benefit from high performing athletes . Such positions call for more participation level resourcing .
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Original: frame The Independent Sport Panel Report (Crawford Report) was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport.
Revised:  The Independent Sport Panel Report (Crawford Report) was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport.
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Original:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging to beliefs that Australians benefit from high performing athletes.
Revised:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging beliefs that Australians benefit from high performing athletes.
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Original:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging to beliefs that Australians benefit from high performing athletes.
Revised:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging to beliefs that Australians benefit from funding high performance athletes.
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Original:  was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport . Defining our national sports vision Reforming the Australian Sports Commission to lead the sports system Merging our institutes of sport Building the capacity of our national sporting organisations Putting sport and physical activity back into education Building community sport with people and places Ensuring Australia's sports system is open to all Sustaining the funding base for sport
Revised:  was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of sport in the country . Defining our national sports vision Reforming the Australian Sports Commission to lead the sports system Merging our institutes of sport Building the capacity of our national sporting organisations Putting sport and physical activity back into education Building community sport with people and places Ensuring Australia's sports system is open to all Sustaining the funding base for sport
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Original:  was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport . Defining our national sports vision Reforming the Australian Sports Commission to lead the sports system Merging our institutes of sport Building the capacity of our national sporting organisations Putting sport and physical activity back into education Building community sport with people and places Ensuring Australia's sports system is open to all Sustaining the funding base for sport
Revised:  was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport . Defining Australia's national sports vision Reforming the Australian Sports Commission to lead the sports system Merging our institutes of sport Building the capacity of our national sporting organisations Putting sport and physical activity back into education Building community sport with people and places Ensuring Australia's sports system is open to all Sustaining the funding base for sport
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Original:  was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport . Defining our national sports vision Reforming the Australian Sports Commission to lead the sports system Merging our institutes of sport Building the capacity of our national sporting organisations Putting sport and physical activity back into education Building community sport with people and places Ensuring Australia's sports system is open to all Sustaining the funding base for sport
Revised:  was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport . Defining our national sports vision Reforming the Australian Sports Commission to lead the sports system Merging Australia's institutes of sport Building the capacity of our national sporting organisations Putting sport and physical activity back into education Building community sport with people and places Ensuring Australia's sports system is open to all Sustaining the funding base for sport
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Original:  was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport . Defining our national sports vision Reforming the Australian Sports Commission to lead the sports system Merging our institutes of sport Building the capacity of our national sporting organisations Putting sport and physical activity back into education Building community sport with people and places Ensuring Australia's sports system is open to all Sustaining the funding base for sport
Revised:  was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation for the future of Australian sport . Defining our national sports vision Reforming the Australian Sports Commission to lead the sports system Merging our institutes of sport Building the capacity of Australia's national sporting organisations Putting sport and physical activity back into education Building community sport with people and places Ensuring Australia's sports system is open to all Sustaining the funding base for sport
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Original:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging  beliefs that Australians benefit from funding high performance athletes.
Revised:  Other commentators have welcomed the recommendations, challenging commonly held beliefs that Australians benefit from funding high performance athletes.
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Original:  Such positions call for more participation level resourcing . Key recommendation areas from the Report are:
Revised:  Such positions call for more resourcing of sport at a participation level rather than performance level . Key recommendation areas from the Report are:
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Original:  Such positions call for more participation level resourcing . Key recommendation areas from the Report are:
Revised:  Such positions call for more participation level resourcing . Key recommendation areas in the Report are:
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Original:  Australian rules football is in line for funding under this report John Coatesthe President of the Australian Olympic Committee has criticised the Report , and several elite sports people have joined Coates' calls for sustained funding to Olympic level sport.
Revised:  Australian rules football is in line for funding under this report John Coates, President of the Australian Olympic Committee has criticised the Report , and several elite sports people have joined Coates' calls for sustained funding to Olympic level sport.
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Original:  Australian rules football is in line for funding under this report John Coatesthe President of the Australian Olympic Committee has criticised the Report , and several elite sports people have joined Coates' calls for sustained funding to Olympic level sport.
Revised:  Australian rules football is in line for funding under this report John Coatesthe President of the Australian Olympic Committee , criticised the report , and several elite sports people have joined Coates' calls for sustained funding to Olympic level sport.
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Original:  Key recommendation areas in the Report are:
Revised:  Key recommendation areas in the report are:
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Original:  Australian rules football is in line for funding under this report John Coates, President of the Australian Olympic Committee, criticised the report, and several elite sports people have joined Coates' calls for sustained funding to Olympic level sport.
Revised:  John Coates, President of the Australian Olympic Committee, criticised the report, and several elite sports people have joined Coates' calls for sustained funding to Olympic level sport.
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Original:  At present, the individual is remaining unidentified.
Revised:  At present, the individual remains unidentified.
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Original:  Speaking to BBC Three Counties Radio, Dunning said: "The staff of Emberton School are very saddened to learn of the death of one of their pupils who was a confident  delightful and happy student and will be missed greatly.
Revised:  Speaking to BBC Three Counties Radio, Dunning said: "The staff of Emberton School are very saddened to learn of the death of one of their pupils who was a confident , delightful and happy student and will be missed greatly.
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Original:  PC Martin Forshaw, 27, used a steel hammer to bludgeon WPC Claire Howarth, 31, before placning her in her car and staging an accident.
Revised:  PC Martin Forshaw, 27, used a steel hammer to bludgeon WPC Claire Howarth, 31, before placing her in her car and staging an accident.
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Original:  Forshaw's intent had been to convince police that Howarth had died behind the wheel, but officers were suspicious because her injuries were huge while the car was virtually undamaged.
Revised:  Forshaw's intent had been to convince police that Howarth had died behind the wheel, but officers became suspicious when they found her injuries were huge while the car was virtually undamaged.
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Original:  Forshaw's intent had been to convince police that Howarth had died behind the wheel, but officers were suspicious because her injuries were huge while the car was virtually undamaged.
Revised:  Forshaw's intent had been to convince police that Howarth had died behind the wheel, but officers were suspicious because her injuries were severe while the car was virtually undamaged.
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Original:  The trial had been due to start today before Manchester Crown Court but Forshaw confessed to his crime .
Revised:  The trial had been due to start today before Manchester Crown Court but Forshaw confessed to the crime beforehand .
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Original:   It was such a poor attempt to make it look like a crash that both the police and the ambulance service were immediately suspicious, and the severity of Claire's head injuries meant they could not have been caused by such a minor crash," said lead investigator Andy Tattersall of Greater Manchester Police.
Revised:  " It was such a poor attempt to make it look like a crash that both the police and the ambulance service were immediately suspicious, and the severity of Claire's head injuries meant they could not have been caused by such a minor crash," said lead investigator Andy Tattersall of Greater Manchester Police.
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Original: A policeman from the United Kingdom has pleaded guilty to the murder of his fiancée, a woman police constable.
Revised: A policeman from the United Kingdom has pleaded guilty to the murder of his fiancée, a female police constable.
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Original: A policeman from the United Kingdom has pleaded guilty to the murder of his fiancée, a female police constable.
Revised: A policeman from the United Kingdom plead guilty to the murder of his fiancée, a female police constable.
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Original: A policeman from the United Kingdom plead guilty to the murder of his fiancée, a female police constable.
Revised: A policeman from the United Kingdom pleaded guilty to the murder of his fiancée, a female police constable.
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Original:  he, his lover  and their child were booked on a trip to Disneyland in Paris.
Revised:  he, his lover , and their child were booked on a trip to Disneyland in Paris.
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Original:  An argument broke out and Forshaw used a large steel hammer to hit her  in the same room as their wedding gifts, her dress and packed suitcases.
Revised:  An argument broke out and Forshaw used a large steel hammer to hit her , in the same room as their wedding gifts, her dress and packed suitcases.
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Original:  An argument broke out and Forshaw used a large steel hammer to hit her  in the same room as their wedding gifts, her dress and packed suitcases.
Revised:  An argument broke out and Forshaw used a large steel hammer to hit her in the same room as her dress and packed suitcases.
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Original:  He then drove to an isolated patch of moorland, placed her in the driver's seat and executed a crash into a hedge at 50-60 mph.
Revised:  He then drove to an isolated patch of moorland, placed her in the driver's seat and executed a crash into a hedge at 50–60 mph.
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Original: Founder of the Victory Christian Centre  Billy Joe Daugherty has died at the age of 57. Daugherty died yesterday at 4:40 am after a short battle with lymphoma.
Revised: Founder of the Victory Christian Centre , Billy Joe Daugherty has died at the age of 57. Daugherty died yesterday at 4:40 am after a short battle with lymphoma.
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Original: Founder of the Victory Christian Centre  Billy Joe Daugherty has died at the age of 57. Daugherty died yesterday at 4:40 am after a short battle with lymphoma.
Revised: Founder of the Victory Christian Centre Billy Joe Daugherty has died at the age of 57. Daugherty died yesterday at 4:40 am . This followed a short battle with lymphoma.
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Original:  His death was announced by church officials during morning services the following day.
Revised:  The death was announced by church officials during morning services the following day.
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Original:  Adam Sanders, Daugherty’s son in law spoke about his final hours during the morning services .
Revised:  Adam Sanders, Daugherty’s son-in-law spoke about his final hours during the morning services .
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Original: “ We celebrate his life, but at the same time there is sorrow, there is grieving ” . His other son in law , Caleb Wehrli emotionally spoke about how the family worshiped up until the end.
Revised: “ We celebrate his life, but at the same time there is sorrow, there is grieving " . His other son in law , Caleb Wehrli emotionally spoke about how the family worshiped up until the end.
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Original: “ We celebrate his life, but at the same time there is sorrow, there is grieving ” . His other son in law , Caleb Wehrli emotionally spoke about how the family worshiped up until the end.
Revised: “ We celebrate his life, but at the same time there is sorrow, there is grieving ” . His other son-in-law , Caleb Wehrli emotionally spoke about how the family worshiped up until the end.
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Original: “ We celebrate his life, but at the same time there is sorrow, there is grieving ” . His other son in law , Caleb Wehrli emotionally spoke about how the family worshiped up until the end.
Revised: “ We celebrate his life, but at the same time there is sorrow, there is grieving ” . His other son in law , Caleb Wehrli , spoke emotionally about how the family worshiped up until the end.
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Original: “ We celebrate his life, but at the same time there is sorrow, there is grieving ” . His other son in law , Caleb Wehrli emotionally spoke about how the family worshiped up until the end.
Revised: “ We celebrate his life, but at the same time there is sorrow, there is grieving ” . His other son in law , Caleb Wehrli emotionally spoke about how the family worshipped up until the end.
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Original:  The Victory Christian Centre is one of the largest churchs in Oklahoma with around 17,000 members.
Revised:  The Victory Christian Centre is one of the largest churches in Oklahoma with around 17,000 members.
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Original:  The Victory Christian Centre is one of the largest churchs in Oklahoma with around 17,000 members.
Revised:  The Victory Christian Centre is one of the largest churchs in Oklahoma with around seventeen thousand members.
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Original:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founding the Christian Centre in Tulsa he also founded the Victory Bible Institute.
Revised:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founded the Christian Centre in Tulsa he also founded the Victory Bible Institute.
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Original:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founding the Christian Centre in Tulsa he also founded the Victory Bible Institute.
Revised:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founding the Christian Centre in Tulsa and the Victory Bible Institute.
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Original:  He also founded and worked with a missionary training centre which has sent over 1000 missionaries to several countries around the world.
Revised:  His work included involvement with a missionary training centre which has sent over 1000 missionaries to several countries around the world.
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Original:  He wrote several books with his wife and appeared in his own television show, Victory in Jesus.
Revised:  Author, with his wife and appeared in his own television show, Victory in Jesus.
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Original:  He wrote several books with his wife and appeared in his own television show, Victory in Jesus.
Revised:  He wrote several books with his wife , of several books he also appeared in his own television show, Victory in Jesus.
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Original:  He wrote several books with his wife and appeared in his own television show, Victory in Jesus.
Revised:  He wrote several books with his wife and appeared in his own TV show, Victory in Jesus.
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Original:  Daugherty made national news in 2005 when he was punched at an altar call .
Revised:  Daugherty made national news in 2005 when punched at an altar call .
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Original:  His  memorial service is scheduled for November 30th 
Revised:  His The memorial service is scheduled for November 30th 
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Original:  His  memorial service is scheduled for November 30th 
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Original:  His  memorial service is scheduled for November 30th 
Revised:  His memorial service is scheduled for November 30th of this month
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Original:  The death was announced by church officials during morning services the following day.
Revised:  The death was announced by church officials during morning services that day.
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Original: Daugherty made national news in 2005 when punched at an altar call the attack required two stitches, but Daugherty chose not to press charges despite visiting his assailant in jail where he showed no remorse;
Revised: Daugherty made national news in 2005 when punched at an altar call . The attack required two stitches, but Daugherty chose not to press charges despite visiting his assailant in jail where he showed no remorse;
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Original: Daugherty made national news in 2005 when punched at an altar call the attack required two stitches, but Daugherty chose not to press charges despite visiting his assailant in jail where he showed no remorse;
Revised: Daugherty made national news in 2005 when punched at an altar call the attack required two stitches, but Daugherty chose not to press charges despite visiting his assailant in jail where the inmate showed no remorse;
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Original:  he penned a book about this incident in his life.
Revised:  Daugherty penned a book about this incident in his life.
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Original:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founded the Christian Centre in Tulsa and the Victory Bible Institute.
Revised:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma , Daugherty was found in the Christian Centre in Tulsa and the Victory Bible Institute.
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Original:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founded the Christian Centre in Tulsa and the Victory Bible Institute.
Revised:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founded the Christian Centre in Tulsa AND in the Victory Bible Institute.
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Original:  The death was announced  by church officials during morning services that day .
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Original:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founded the Christian Centre in Tulsa and  the Victory Bible Institute.
Revised:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma , Daugherty was found in the Christian Centre in Tulsa and the Victory Bible Institute.
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Original:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founded the Christian Centre in Tulsa and  the Victory Bible Institute.
Revised:  Born in Tulsa, Oklahoma Daugherty also founded the Christian Centre in Tulsa and in the Victory Bible Institute.
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Original:  The memorial service is planned for the 30th of this month
Revised:  The memorial service was planned for the 30th of this month
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Original: Houben used the keyboard to tell a German newspaper that he 'screamed, but there was nothing to hear .' Despite discovering his consciouness in 2006, Houben's case only came to light recently after a study published in the journal BMC Neurology about coma patients used his case as an example.
Revised: Houben used the keyboard to tell a German newspaper that he 'screamed, but there was nothing to hear .' Despite discovering his consciousness in 2006, Houben's case only came to light recently after a study published in the journal BMC Neurology about coma patients used his case as an example.
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Original: A Belgian man who was thought to have been in a coma for 23 years was in fact conscious yet paraylzed the whole time.
Revised: A Belgian man who was thought to have been in a coma for 23 years was in fact conscious yet paralyzed the whole time.
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Original:  Dcotors diagnosed Rom Houben, now 46, as being in an irretrievable coma after a car crash in 1983.
Revised:  Doctors diagnosed Rom Houben, now 46, as being in an irretrievable coma after a car crash in 1983.
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Original:  It was only after his family's insistance that he be given another PET scan that doctors realised he had been conscious yet unable to move or talk ever since the accident.
Revised:  It was only after his family's insistence that he be given another PET scan that doctors realised he had been conscious yet unable to move or talk ever since the accident.
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