wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting Andrew They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
Revised:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
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Original: This continued stereotype of aggression and hyper-masculinity is due to the environment that young African American males are raised in . Adolescents raised in distressed communities are more inclined to adhere to violence and this is due to the multiple factors that coerce violence in these communities.
Revised: This continued stereotype of aggression and hyper-masculinity is due to the environment in which young African American males are raised in . Adolescents raised in distressed communities are more inclined to adhere to violence and this is due to the multiple factors that coerce violence in these communities.
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Original: This continued stereotype of aggression and hyper-masculinity is due to the environment that young African American males are raised in . Adolescents raised in distressed communities are more inclined to adhere to violence and this is due to the multiple factors that coerce violence in these communities.
Revised: This continued stereotype of aggression and hyper-masculinity is due to the environment that young African American males are raised . Adolescents raised in distressed communities are more inclined to adhere to violence and this is due to the multiple factors that coerce violence in these communities.
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Original:  Other than the environment, another imperative factor to a child's growth are the parents or adults they are surrounded by .
Revised:  Other than the environment, another imperative factor to a child's growth are the parents or adults that surround them .
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Original:  They are measured by Social Capital which is the amount of time parents spend with their children, how close they are to each other, and anything that is given to the children that 'll increase their social development.
Revised:  They are measured by Social Capital which is the amount of time parents spend with their children, how close they are to each other, and anything that is given to the children that will increase their social development.
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Original:  This strictness is shown by parents controlling their sons and enforcing an expectation of masculinity from them .
Revised:  This strictness is shown by parents controlling their sons and enforcing an expectation of masculinity .
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Original:  Research has found that hypermasculinity is associated with sexual and physical aggression towards women and perceived homosexual men.
Revised:  Research has found that hypermasculinity is associated with sexual and physical aggression towards women and perceived gay men.
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Original: In 1977, Gerrit Ferreria co-founded FirstRand's predecessor, Rand Consolidated Investing along with Paul Harris and Lauritz Dippenaar.
Revised: In 1977, he co-founded FirstRand's predecessor, Rand Consolidated Investing along with Paul Harris and Lauritz Dippenaar.
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Original:  He is also one of the co-founder of Firstrand bank in South Africa.
Revised:  He is also one of the co-founders of Firstrand bank in South Africa.
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Original:  Previously, he served as MD of RMB Holdings between 1985-88.
Revised:  Previously, he served as MD of RMB Holdings between 1985–88.
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Original:  Authentic CEO, Scott Petry, who founded the email security company Authentic8 , is also a Virtru board member.
Revised:  Authentic8 CEO, Scott Petry, who founded the email security company Authentic8 , is also a Virtru board member.
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Original: Virtru is an email encryption and digital privacy company.
Revised: Virtru is an email encryption and digital privacy 
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Original:  History Launched in 2012, John Ackerly is the CEO and Co-Founder of Virtru and Will Ackerly is the CTO and Co-Founder of Virtru, a digital privacy company based in Washington D.C. Prior to founding Virtru in 2012, John was responsible for privacy and technology policy at the White House National Economic Council and was the Policy and Strategic Planning Director at the U.S. Department of Commerce.
Revised:  provider founded in 2012. The company is headquartered in Washington, D.C. Prior to founding Virtru in 2012, John was responsible for privacy and technology policy at the White House National Economic Council and was the Policy and Strategic Planning Director at the U.S. Department of Commerce.
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Original:  On August 22, 2016, Virtru announced that it has closed on $29 million in Series A funding.
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Original:  Overview At the core of Virtru-enabled applications is the open source Trusted Data Format (TDF) , which allows fine-grained access control for all file types and attachments, such as emails, Office files, pdfs, photos, and videos .
Revised:  Overview At the core of Virtru-enabled applications is the open-standard Trusted Data Format (TDF) , which allows fine-grained access control for all file types and attachments, such as emails, Office files, pdfs, photos, and videos .
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Original:  Overview At the core of Virtru-enabled applications is the open source Trusted Data Format (TDF) , which allows fine-grained access control for all file types and attachments, such as emails, Office files, pdfs, photos, and videos .
Revised:  Overview At the core of Virtru-enabled applications is the open source Trusted Data Format (TDF) .
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Original:  While the TDF technology is applicable to a wide variety of data security applications, Virtru has focused first on email.
Revised:  While the TDF technology is applicable to a wide variety of data security applications, Virtru ’s portfolio of products include:
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Original:  The TDF is a JSON-encoded data format that employs multiple cryptographic and security techniques to enable secure sharing in ways that are impossible with traditional network-based defenses .
Revised:  The TDF is a JSON-encoded data format that employs multiple cryptographic and security techniques to enable secure sharing in ways that are impossible with traditional network-based defenses 
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Original:  While the TDF technology is applicable to a wide variety of data security applications, Virtru’s portfolio of products include:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Data privacy solutions that transparently integrate into commonly used applications, such as Gmail, Microsoft Outlook, and Google Drive, providing seamless security and total control.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Data privacy solutions that transparently integrate into commonly used applications, such as Gmail, Microsoft Outlook, and Google Drive, providing seamless security and total control.
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Original: Soham is a Bengali guy who started singing at the age of 10.
Revised: Soham is a Bengali , who started singing at the age of 10.
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Original:  Music directors Bappi Lahiri and O P Nayyar suggested  that if he wanted to pursue singing as a career, he'd have to shift base to Mumbai.
Revised:  Music directors Bappi Lahiri and O P Nayyar suggested to him that if he wanted to pursue singing as a career, he'd have to shift base to Mumbai.
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Original:  Till now his big hit is "In dino" song from the movie Life In A...
Revised:  Till now his big hit is "In dino" song from the movie Life in A...
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Original:  Metro. 2007 FilmSongCo-singer(s) Life In A...
Revised:  Metro. 2007 FilmSongCo-singer(s) Life in A...
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Original:  Metro "In Dino"Hattrick "Kahan Kho Gaya - Reprise" "Kahaan Kho Gaya Hai Dil Mera" Dhol "O Yaara Dhol Bajaake" Sohail Kaul 2010 FilmSongCo-singer(s) Toh Baat Pakki!
Revised:  Metro "In Dino"Hattrick "Kahan Kho Gaya – Reprise" "Kahaan Kho Gaya Hai Dil Mera" Dhol "O Yaara Dhol Bajaake" Sohail Kaul 2010 FilmSongCo-singer(s) Toh Baat Pakki!
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Original:  "Karle Mujhse Pyaar - Remix" Pritam Chakraborty Do Dilon Ke Khel Mein "Ajnabee Ehsas Ko" Chance Pe Dance "Pal Mein Hi" Shreya Ghoshal Year Award Category Film Result Ref 2000 Zee TV's Sa Re Ga Ma 2000 Winner in Grand Finale 2008 Screen Award 2008 Screen Award for Best Playback Singer - Male Life In A... Metro
Revised:  "Karle Mujhse Pyaar – Remix" Pritam Chakraborty Do Dilon Ke Khel Mein "Ajnabee Ehsas Ko" Chance Pe Dance "Pal Mein Hi" Shreya Ghoshal Year Award Category Film Result Ref 2000 Zee TV's Sa Re Ga Ma 2000 Winner in Grand Finale 2008 Screen Award 2008 Screen Award for Best Playback Singer - Male Life In A... Metro
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Original:  "Karle Mujhse Pyaar - Remix" Pritam Chakraborty Do Dilon Ke Khel Mein "Ajnabee Ehsas Ko" Chance Pe Dance "Pal Mein Hi" Shreya Ghoshal Year Award Category Film Result Ref 2000 Zee TV's Sa Re Ga Ma 2000 Winner in Grand Finale 2008 Screen Award 2008 Screen Award for Best Playback Singer - Male Life In A... Metro
Revised:  "Karle Mujhse Pyaar - Remix" Pritam Chakraborty Do Dilon Ke Khel Mein "Ajnabee Ehsas Ko" Chance Pe Dance "Pal Mein Hi" Shreya Ghoshal Year Award Category Film Result Ref 2000 Zee TV's Sa Re Ga Ma 2000 Winner in Grand Finale 2008 Screen Award 2008 Screen Award for Best Playback Singer – Male Life in A... Metro
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Original: Soham Chakrabarty (Bengali:সোহম চক্রবর্তী) is a playback singer who has sung many songs for Bollywood movies as well as for Bengali movies.
Revised: Soham Chakrabarty is a playback singer who has sung many songs for Bollywood movies as well as for Bengali movies.
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Original:  He  trained in Hindustani classical music under the guidance of Pandit Jayendra Ghosh, Ustad Mohammed Sagaruddin Khan saab and Sukhdev Sengupta.
Revised:  He is trained in Hindustani classical music under the guidance of Pandit Jayendra Ghosh, Ustad Mohammed Sagaruddin Khan saab and Sukhdev Sengupta.
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Original:  He has also sung devotional songs with popular singers like Debashish, Preeti, Pinky, Javed Ali, Charanjeet Singh Sondhi, Kalpana, Priya Bhattacharya etc
Revised:  He has also sung devotional songs with popular singers like Debashish, Preeti, Pinky, Javed Ali, Charanjeet Singh Sondhi, Kalpana, Priya Bhattacharya , etc.
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Original:  He was declared the winner of Zee's "Sa-re-ga-ma"(A musical competition) in  2000 (at the age of 20).
Revised:  He was declared the winner of Zee's "Sa-re-ga-ma"(A musical competition) in the year 2000 (at the age of 20).
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Original:  Till now his big hit is "In dino " song from the movie Life in A... Metro  .
Revised:  Till now his big hit is "In Dino " song from the movie Life in A... Metro .
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Original:  Metro and "Khudaya Kair " from the movie Billu Barber.
Revised:  Metro and "Khudaya Khair " from the movie Billu Barber.
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Original:  For example, cucurbita foetidissima, the buffalo gourd, is well adapted to marginal agricultural lands such as sandy loam soils which have to be well-drained.
Revised:  For example, Cucurbita foetidissima, the buffalo gourd, is well adapted to marginal agricultural lands such as sandy loam soils which have to be well-drained.
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Original:  Land that is marginal for conventional row-crop production is often well-suited to perennial crops, including low-input crops grown as bioenergy or bioproduct feedtocks such as switchgrass (Panicum virgatum), shrub willow (Salix spp.), and giant miscanthus (Miscanthus x giganteus), allowing production of these crops without inducing competition for prime farmlands.
Revised:  Land that is marginal for conventional row-crop production is often well-suited to perennial crops, including low-input crops grown as bioenergy or bioproduct feedstocks such as switchgrass (Panicum virgatum), shrub willow (Salix spp.), and giant miscanthus (Miscanthus x giganteus), allowing production of these crops without inducing competition for prime farmlands.
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Original:  Marginal land is land that is of little agricultural value because crops produced from the area would be worth less than any rent paid for access to the area.
Revised:  Marginal land is land that is of little agricultural value because croe area would be worth less than any rent paid for access to the area.
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Original:  Although the term marginal is often used in a subjective sense for less-than-ideal lands, it is fundamentally an economic term that is defined by the local economic context.
Revised:  Although the teran-ideal lands, it is fundamentally an economic term that is defined by the local economic context.
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Original:  Changes in product values – such as the ethanol-demand induced spike in corn prices – can result in formerly marginal lands becoming profitable.
Revised:  in product values – such as the ethanol-demand induced spike in corn prices – can result in formerly marginal lands becoming profitable.
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Original: While at Cambridge  he was elected president of the African Students' Union, and interested himself in Pan-Africanist politics.
Revised: While at Cambridge University he was elected president of the African Students' Union, and interested himself in Pan-Africanist politics.
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Original:  from 1956 to 1959 he worked and studied at the University College Hospital, London, and 1959 was awarded a Medical and Surgery diploma from Cambridge.
Revised:  from 1956 to 1959 he worked and studied at University College Hospital, London, and 1959 was awarded a Medical and Surgery diploma from Cambridge.
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Original:  Peters was President of the Historic Commission of Monuments of the Gambia, was president of the board of directors of the National Library of the Gambia and  Gambia College from 1979 to 1987, and was a member and President of the West African Examination Council (WAEC) from 1985 to 1991.
Revised:  Peters was President of the Historic Commission of Monuments of the Gambia, was president of the board of directors of the National Library of the Gambia and The Gambia College from 1979 to 1987, and was a member and President of the West African Examination Council (WAEC) from 1985 to 1991.
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Original:  In 2007, Naseer was awarded a Fulbright Scholarship, and completed his MA in Economic Policy from Williams College, Massachusetts, USA .
Revised:  In 2007, Naseer was awarded a Fulbright Scholarship, and completed his MA in Economic Policy from Williams College, Massachusetts, United States .
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Original: Ahmed Naseer (born October 31, 1975 Maldives) is a Maldivian economist and the CEO of the Capital Market Development Authority (CMDA) . Naseer was raised in Malé, the capital of Maldives, and attended Iskandar School and Majeediyya School.
Revised: Ahmed Naseer (born October 31, 1975 Maldives) is a Maldivian economist . Naseer was raised in Malé, the capital of Maldives, and attended Iskandar School and Majeediyya School.
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Original:  Upon completion of his GCE O levels, he joined the Science Education Center for his higher secondary education He received his bachelor's degree in economics and marketing from the Curtin University, Perth, Australia.
Revised:  Upon completion of his GCE O levels, he joined the Science Education Center for his higher secondary education He received his bachelor's degree in Economics from the Curtin University, Perth, Australia.
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Original:  Naseer has also been credited as the pioneer in the local island tourism in Maldives, with the opening of his Guest House, WhiteShell Beach Inn in Maafushi Island as the first guest house to be opened in a local URL
Revised:  Naseer has also been credited as the pioneer in the local island tourism in Maldives, with the opening of his Guest House, WhiteShell Beach Inn in Maafushi Island as the first guest house to be opened in a local island.
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Original:  He then was appointed for the government in April 2011 as a State Minister of URL
Revised:  He then was appointed for the government in April 2011 as a State Minister of Finance.
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Original: Ahmed Naseer (born October 31, 1975 in Maldives) is a Maldivian economist . Naseer resigned from his Government post towards the end of December 2011.
Revised: Ahmed Naseer (born October 31, 1975 in Maldives) is a Maldivian economist . Naseer resigned from his government post towards the end of December 2011.
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Original:  At the age of fifteen he was awarded a scholarship to study with the Royal Ballet School, and in 1969, he graduated to the Royal Ballet Touring Company.
Revised:  At the age of 15, he was awarded a scholarship to study with the Royal Ballet School, and in 1969, he graduated to the Royal Ballet Touring Company.
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Original:  American ballerina Gelsey Kirkland personally chose him to partner her when she danced the role after her defection from the American Ballet Theatre and America itself. Notes
Revised:  American ballerina Gelsey Kirkland personally chose him to partner her when she danced the role after her defection from the American Ballet Theatre and America itself. References
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Original:  The three criteria given above will not always agree, and a balance has to be struck between them in decideing whether or not to include an item.
Revised:  The three criteria given above will not always agree, and a balance has to be struck between them in deciding whether or not to include an item.
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Original: Software NCSS: Item Analysis References Guilford, J. P. (1936).
Revised:  References Guilford, J. P. (1936).
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Original:  for example classical test theory or the Rasch model will call for different procedures.
Revised:  for example classical test theory or the Rasch model call for different procedures.
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Original:  A variety of statistical procedures are applied to the responses to the candidate items, in order to eliminate unsatisfactory items.
Revised:  Researchers apply a variety of statistical procedures are applied to the responses to the candidate items, in order to eliminate unsatisfactory items.
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Original:  A variety of statistical procedures are applied to the responses to the candidate items, in order to eliminate unsatisfactory items.
Revised:  A variety of statistical procedures to the responses to the candidate items, in order to eliminate unsatisfactory items.
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Original:  A variety of statistical procedures are applied to the responses to the candidate items, in order to eliminate unsatisfactory items.
Revised:  A variety of statistical procedures are applied to the responses to eliminate unsatisfactory items.
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Original:  In practical test construction, item analysis is an iterative process, and it cannot be entirely automated ;
Revised:  In practical test construction, item analysis is an iterative process, and cannot be entirely automated ;
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Original:  the psychometrician's judgement is required to determine whether the emerging set of items to be retained will constitute a satisfactory test of the target construct.
Revised:  the psychometrician's judgement is required to determine whether the emerging set of items to be retained constitutes a satisfactory test of the target construct.
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Original:  The three criteria given above will not always agree, and a balance has to be struck between them in deciding whether or not to include an item.
Revised:  The three criteria above do not always agree, and a balance has to be struck between them in deciding whether or not to include an item.
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Original:  The three criteria given above will not always agree, and a balance has to be struck between them in deciding whether or not to include an item.
Revised:  The three criteria given above will not always agree, and a balance must be struck between them in deciding whether or not to include an item.
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Original: Within psychometrics, Item analysis refers to statistical methods used for selecting items for inclusion in a psychological test .
Revised: Within psychometrics, Item analysis refers to bubu hamesha khati rehti hai motti harr time dudu ko maarti rehti hai .
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Original: Within psychometrics, Item analysis refers to bubu hamesha khati rehti hai motti harr time dudu ko maarti rehti hai .
Revised: Within psychometrics, Item analysis refers to statistical methods used for selecting items for inclusion in a psychological test .
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Original: FULANI PROVERB MASHKURU ALIYU ROGO PRESEDENT AT / KAWTAL JANNGOOBE FULFULDE ( kanful) F.C.E KANO Habbere buri gurongal.
Revised: .........FULFULDE PROVERB......... By MASHKURU ALIYU ROGO PRESEDENT AT / KAWTAL JANNGOOBE FULFULDE ( kanful) F.C.E KANO Habbere buri gurongal.
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Original: FULANI PROVERB MASHKURU ALIYU ROGO PRESEDENT AT / KAWTAL JANNGOOBE FULFULDE ( kanful) F.C.E KANO Habbere buri gurongal.
Revised: FULANI PROVERB MASHKURU ALIYU ROGO PRESIDENT AT KAWTAL JANNGOOBE FULFULDE ( kanful) F.C.E KANO Habbere buri gurongal.
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Original: FULANI PROVERB MASHKURU ALIYU ROGO PRESEDENT AT /KAWTAL JANNGOOBE FULFULDE (kanful) F.C.E KANO Habbere buri gurongal.
Revised: Fulani proverbs: Mashkuru Aliyu Rogo PRESEDENT AT /KAWTAL JANNGOOBE FULFULDE (kanful) F.C.E KANO Habbere buri gurongal.
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Original:  ( fulfulde) jugde according to intension (English) Munyal deefan hayre.
Revised:  ( Fulfulde) Judge according to intention. (English) Munyal deefan hayre.
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Original:  (English) Fulfulde proverb.
Revised:  Fulfulde proverb.
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Original:  It says, "Learn till old, live till old, and there is still one-third not learned,"  meaning that no matter how old you are, there is still more learning or studying left to d
Revised:  "Learn till old, live till old, and there is still one-third not learned," meaning that no matter how old you are, there is still more learning or studying left to d
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Original:  It says, "Learn till old, live till old, and there is still one-third not learned,"  meaning that no matter how old you are, there is still more learning or studying left to d
Revised:  It says, "Learn till old, live till old, and there is still one-third not learned," ( meaning that no matter how old you are, there is still more learning or studying left to d
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Original:  It says, "Learn till old, live till old, and there is still one-third not learned,"  meaning that no matter how old you are, there is still more learning or studying left to d
Revised:  It says, "Learn till old, live till old, and there is still one-third not learned," meaning that no matter how old you are, there is still more learning or studying left to do
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Original:  "Learn till old, live till old, and there is still one-third not learned," (meaning that no matter how old you are, there is still more learning or studying left to do   
Revised:  "Learn till old, live till old, and there is still one-third not learned," (meaning that no matter how old you are, there is still more learning or studying left to do Sources 
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Original:  Niinimaa, Veli: "Jaakko Ilkka  – A Rebellion Leader and a Freedom Fighter" Jaakko Ilkka Family.
Revised:  1 – A Rebellion Leader and a Freedom Fighter" Jaakko Ilkka Family.
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