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Original: The statement also went on to accuse the United States and other nations of "viciously tricking [the countrya into putting] a brake on the wheel of not only the DPRK's building of military capability for self-defense but also scientific researches for peaceful purpose under the pretext of missile," added the statement.
Revised: The statement also went on to accuse the United States and other nations of "viciously tricking [the country into putting] a brake on the wheel of not only the DPRK's building of military capability for self-defense but also scientific researches for peaceful purpose under the pretext of missile," added the statement.
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Original:  Earlier reports from the U.S. and South Korean government had said that N. Korea was planning a test launch of the intercontinental ballistic missile, the Taepodong-2.
Revised:  Earlier reports from the U.S. and South Korean government had said that N. Korea was planning a test launch of an intercontinental ballistic missile, the Taepodong-2.
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Original:  Previous reports say that N. Korea was trying to gain the attention of the new U.S. president Barack Obama, but the country denies those claims  saying, "the DPRK has no need to draw anyone's attention and does not want anybody to interfere or meddle in the issue of the Korean peninsula.
Revised:  Previous reports say that N. Korea was trying to gain the attention of the new U.S. president Barack Obama, but the country denies those claims , saying, "the DPRK has no need to draw anyone's attention and does not want anybody to interfere or meddle in the issue of the Korean peninsula.
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Original: The document leaking website Wikileaks recently obtained a confidential NATO report that reveals many surprising facts regarding the war in Afghanistan.
Revised: The transparency group Wikileaks recently obtained a confidential NATO report that reveals many surprising facts regarding the war in Afghanistan.
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Original:  The report, dated January 14, 2009, is comprised of twelve pages of statistics in the form of maps, graphs  and text on the US military statistics in 2008.
Revised:  The report, dated January 14, 2009, is comprised of twelve pages of statistics in the form of maps, graphs , and text on the US military statistics in 2008.
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Original:  Even with an increase in attacks, the overall suicide bombing rate dropped in 2008, down 5\%  and civilians are starting to turn-in terror suspects to the military, which was up 21\%.
Revised:  Even with an increase in attacks, the overall suicide bombing rate dropped in 2008, down 5\% , and civilians are starting to turn-in terror suspects to the military, which was up 21\%.
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Original:  Even with an increase in attacks, the overall suicide bombing rate dropped in 2008, down 5\%  and civilians are starting to turn-in terror suspects to the military, which was up 21\%.
Revised:  Even with an increase in attacks, the overall suicide bombing rate dropped in 2008, down 5\% and civilians are starting to turn in terror suspects to the military, which was up 21\%.
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Original:  In an unrelated leak case,  source from the United Kingdom Defence Ministry told the Daily Mail: "The whole point of defeating the Taliban is winning hearts and minds and stopping the population joining their cause.
Revised:  In an unrelated leak case, a source from the United Kingdom Defence Ministry told the Daily Mail: "The whole point of defeating the Taliban is winning hearts and minds and stopping the population joining their cause.
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Original: The transparency group Wikileaks recently obtained a confidential NATO report that reveals many surprising facts regarding the war in Afghanistan.
Revised: The document leaking website Wikileaks recently obtained a confidential NATO report that reveals many surprising facts regarding the war in Afghanistan.
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Original: The document leaking website Wikileaks recently obtained a confidential NATO report that reveals many surprising facts regarding the war in Afghanistan.
Revised: The document-leaking website Wikileaks recently obtained a confidential NATO report that reveals many surprising facts regarding the war in Afghanistan.
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Original:  Coalition causalities have also risen nearly 35\% and IED attacks are up 27\%.
Revised:  Coalition casualities have also risen nearly 35\% and IED attacks are up 27\%.
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Original:  The report also says that only 24\% of Afghan citizens see an improvement in security  .
Revised:  The report also says that 24\% of Afghan citizens see an improvement in security .
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Original:  In an unrelated leak case, a source from the United Kingdom Defence Ministry told the Daily Mail : "The whole point of defeating the Taliban is winning hearts and minds and stopping the population joining their cause.
Revised:  In an unrelated leak case, a source from the United Kingdom Defence Ministry told the : "The whole point of defeating the Taliban is winning hearts and minds and stopping the population joining their cause.
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Original: The document-leaking website Wikileaks recently obtained a confidential NATO report that reveals many surprising facts regarding the war in Afghanistan.
Revised: The document-leaking website Wikileaks recently obtained a confidential NATO report that reveals many surprising facts regarding the in Afghanistan.
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Original:  It describes in poetic prose the rebellion of a private tutor against his employer and the menacing world of the 1930s, moving from a nightmarish state to one where he recognizes that he must join the workers' movement
Revised:  It describes in poetic prose the rebellion of a private tutor against his employer and the menacing world of the 1930s, moving from a nightmarish state to one where he recognized that he must join the workers' movement
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Original:  It describes in poetic prose the rebellion of a private tutor against his employer and the menacing world of the 1930s, moving from a nightmarish state to one where he recognized that he must join the workers' movement
Revised:  It described in poetic prose the rebellion of a private tutor against his employer and the menacing world of the 1930s, moving from a nightmarish state to one where he recognized that he must join the workers' movement
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Original: Upward was born Edward Falaise Upward on 9 September 1903 in Romford, England.
Revised: Upward was born Edward Falaise Upward on September 9, 1903 in Romford, England.
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Original:  Upward's first novel , Journey to the Border, was published by the Hogarth Press in 1938.
Revised:  Upward's first novel Journey to the Border, was published by the Hogarth Press in 1938.
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Original:  It described in poetic prose  the rebellion of a private tutor against his employer and the menacing world of the 1930s , moving from a nightmarish state to one where he recognized that he must join the workers' movement
Revised:  It described in poetic prose , the rebellion of a private tutor against his employer and the menacing world of the 1930s , moving from a nightmarish state to one where he recognized that he must join the workers' movement
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Original:  It described in poetic prose  the rebellion of a private tutor against his employer and the menacing world of the 1930s , moving from a nightmarish state to one where he recognized that he must join the workers' movement
Revised:  It described in poetic prose the rebellion of a private tutor against his employer and the menacing world of the 1930s 
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Original: Upward   's first novel Journey to the Border, was published by the Hogarth Press in 1938.
Revised: Upward joined the communist party in 1932 after the fall of Britain's Labour Party in the summer of 1931. He recalls joining the party because he felt "psychological need" so satisfy his imagination of it. He was convinced his fear of becoming mentally unstable would be cured, because his cousin Allen, who was also an author, killed himself after going crazy. Upward stated he was impressed with his cousin's suicide, because he thought he would die the same way. 's first novel Journey to the Border, was published by the Hogarth Press in 1938.
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Original: Upward   's first novel Journey to the Border, was published by the Hogarth Press in 1938.
Revised: Upward Upward 's first novel Journey to the Border, was published by the Hogarth Press in 1938.
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Original: The chimp has been identified as 'Travis' and his owner as Sandy Herold.
Revised: The chimp has been identified as 'Travis' and his owner as Sandra Herold.
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Original:  She is said to have suffered serious life-threatening injuries and was taken to nearby Stamford Hospital with multiple bite wounds and cuts.
Revised:  She is said to have suffered life-threatening injuries and was taken to nearby Stamford Hospital with multiple bite wounds and cuts.
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Original:  This is not Travis' s first encounter with the police.
Revised:  This is not Travis' first encounter with the police.
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Original:  However, The Stamford Advocate reports that in that incident, Travis was locked out of the SUV and walked to the other side to try another door when an officer shot him.
Revised:  However, The Advocate reports that in that incident, Travis was locked out of the SUV and walked to the other side to try another door when an officer shot him.
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Original:  Both of Travis' s ownersHerold and her husband Jay, have lived in their home on Rimmon Road in Stamford for several years.
Revised:  Travis' owners, Sandra and her husband Jay, have lived in their home on Rimmon Road in Stamford for several years.
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Original:   Travis would even ride around with Jay in his tow truck and  cars he towed for several years
Revised:  For years, Travis would even ride around with Jay in his tow truck and cars he towed for several years
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Original:   Travis would even ride around with Jay in his tow truck and  cars he towed for several years
Revised:  Travis would even ride around with Jay in his tow truck and the cars he towed for several years
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Original:   Travis would even ride around with Jay in his tow truck and  cars he towed for several years
Revised:  Travis would even ride around with Jay in his tow truck and cars he towed 
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Original:  Times itself, of dereliction due to their uncritical coverage of the U.S. administration shortly before the 2003 invasion of Iraq  
Revised:  Times itself, of dereliction due to their uncritical coverage of the U.S. administration shortly before the 2003 invasion of Iraq . 
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Original:  There is speculation that this could be due to the Slashdot effect as it was recently Posted on Slashdot     
Revised:  There is speculation that this could be due to the Slashdot effect as it was recently Posted on Slashdot . 
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Original:  " There is speculation that this could be due to the Slashdot effect as it was recently Posted on Slashdot .
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Original:  Update: the text now reads:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Where is the wikitorial?
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Original:  Update: the text now reads:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Where is the wikitorial?
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Original:  Unfortunately, we have had to remove this feature, at least temporarily, because a few readers were flooding the site with inappropriate material.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Thanks and apologies to the thousands of people who logged on in the right spirit
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Original:  " There is speculation that this could be due to the Slashdot effect as it was recently Posted on Slashdot and that the LA Times was not prepared for the editing wars which quickly ensued
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Original: In a press release dated February 16th, Robert Kahn, Stanford University's Public Affairs Coordinator, announced the experimental confirmation of frame dragging, an effect in which the presence of a nearby rotating body can make the passing of time slow down .
Revised: In a press release dated February 16th, Robert Kahn, Stanford University's Public Affairs Coordinator, announced the experimental confirmation of frame dragging, an effect in which the presence of a rotating body causes space itself to be pulled along as the body rotates .
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Original:  However, the complexity of the data analysis along with unforseen engineering problems have made finding the effect in the experiment's results difficult.
Revised:  However, the complexity of the data analysis along with unforeseen engineering problems have made finding the effect in the experiment's results difficult.
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Original:  While the effect was theorized by Josef Lense and Hans Thirring as far back as 1918, the small scale of the effect, as little as one part in a trillion for a satellite orbiting the Earth, made detecting the it difficult.
Revised:  While the effect was theorized by Josef Lense and Hans Thirring as far back as 1918, the small scale of the effect, as little as one part in a trillion for a satellite orbiting the Earth, made detecting the effect difficult.
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Original: Francis Everett , the experiment's Principal Investigator, stresses in an interview with the New York Times that their announcement is only preliminary and that, with further analysis, they hope to improve the precision of their results;
Revised: Francis Everitt , the experiment's Principal Investigator, stresses in an interview with the New York Times that their announcement is only preliminary and that, with further analysis, they hope to improve the precision of their results;
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Original:  "People don't realize where California is at -- people are losing homes, people are losing jobs," said Republican state senator Abel Malonado . "You're not going to go back to the people's pocketbooks to fuel that spending," added Republican Senator Dennis Hollingsworth from Temecula.
Revised:  "People don't realize where California is at — people are losing homes, people are losing jobs," said Republican state senator Abel Malonado . "You're not going to go back to the people's pocketbooks to fuel that spending," added Republican Senator Dennis Hollingsworth from Temecula.
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Original:  "People don't realize where California is at -- people are losing homes, people are losing jobs," said Republican state senator Abel Malonado . "You're not going to go back to the people's pocketbooks to fuel that spending," added Republican Senator Dennis Hollingsworth from Temecula.
Revised:  "People don't realize where California is at -- people are losing homes, people are losing jobs," said Republican state senator Abel Maldonado . "You're not going to go back to the people's pocketbooks to fuel that spending," added Republican Senator Dennis Hollingsworth from Temecula.
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Original:  "People don't realize where California is at -- people are losing homes, people are losing jobs," said Republican state senator Abel Malonado . "You're not going to go back to the people's pocketbooks to fuel that spending," added Republican Senator Dennis Hollingsworth from Temecula.
Revised:  "People don't realize where California is at -- people are losing homes, people are losing jobs," said Republican state senator Abel Malonado . "You're not going to go back to the people's pocketbooks to fuel that spending," added Republican state senator Dennis Hollingsworth from Temecula.
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Original: The US state of California will start notifying about twenty thousand state workers that they may be fired .
Revised: The US state of California started notifying approximately twenty thousand state workers that they may be fired .
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Original: The US state of California will start notifying about twenty thousand state workers that they may be fired .
Revised: The US state of California will start notifying about twenty thousand state workers that they are being laid off .
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Original:  This comes after California lawmakers voted out a budget worth US $40 billion last weekend.
Revised:  This comes after California lawmakers voted down a budget worth US $40 billion last weekend.
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Original: Republican National Committee chairman Michael  Steele said he was disappointed by what he said was the president's lack of a bipartisan approach in passing the bill: "In these difficult economic times, it is imperative that Republicans and Democrats work together to create new jobs and grow the economy.
Revised: Republican National Committee chairman Michael S. Steele said he was disappointed by what he said was the president's lack of a bipartisan approach in passing the bill: "In these difficult economic times, it is imperative that Republicans and Democrats work together to create new jobs and grow the economy.
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Original:  Instead, Congressional Democrats worked behind closed doors to write legislation that will fall short of creating the promised new jobs, but will guarantee a larger debt burden on our children and grandchildren."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% US stock markets were lower today, with the Dow Jones Industrial Average losing 3.29\% or 258.62 points at the end of the day to a level of 7,591.79.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A third US car manufacturer, Ford, has said that it can make it through this year without any government aid.
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Original: 200px|A PT Cruiser, one of the car models that Chrysler is planning to cut from productionThe United States car manufacturer Chrysler, which has been badly affected by the ongoing recession, has asked the US government for an additional US $5 billion in aid on top of the four billion it has already received, saying that it plans to fire three thousand employees.
Revised: 200px|A PT Cruiser, one of the car models that Chrysler is planning to cut from productionThe United States auto manufacturer Chrysler, which has been badly affected by the ongoing recession, has asked the US government for an additional US $5 billion in aid on top of the four billion it has already received, saying that it plans to fire three thousand employees.
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Original:  A third US car manufacturer, Ford  , has said that it can make it through this year without any government aid.
Revised:  A third US car manufacturer, Ford Motor Company , has said that it can make it through this year without any government aid.
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Original:  The US Treasury Department will review the carmakers ' survival plans for several weeks before a decision is made on whether or not to extend the loans.
Revised:  The US Treasury Department will review the car makers ' survival plans for several weeks before a decision is made on whether or not to extend the loans.
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Original:  That decision is due by the end of next month  
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A third US car manufacturer, Ford Motor Company, has said that it can make it through this year without any government aid.
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Original:  "In 2012 there will be presidential elections, and unless God decides otherwise, unless the people decide otherwise, this soldier is already a candidate.   
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Original: Israeli foreign minister Tzipi Livni has stated that in order to make peace  settlement expansion must stop , and furthermore Israeli settlers should leave lands already settled in.
Revised: Israeli foreign minister Tzipi Livni has stated that in order to make peace , settlement expansion must stop , and furthermore Israeli settlers should leave lands already settled in.
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Original: Israeli foreign minister Tzipi Livni has stated that in order to make peace  settlement expansion must stop , and furthermore Israeli settlers should leave lands already settled in.
Revised: Israeli foreign minister Tzipi Livni has stated that in order to make peace settlement expansion must stop and furthermore Israeli settlers should leave lands already settled in.
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Original:  This comes after United States Special EnvoyGeorge Mitchell asked for a freeze on settlement expansion which is deemed illegal under international law.
Revised:  This comes after United States Special Envoy George Mitchell asked for a freeze on settlement expansion which is deemed illegal under international law.
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