wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Gaza citizens who had been stuck in Egypt as they were unable to enter the Gaza Strip, were able to return to their homes .
Revised:  Gaza citizens who had been stuck in Egypt as they were unable to enter the Gaza Strip, were able to return home .
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Original:  According to Maher Abu Sabha, director of border crossings in the Gaza Strip , those who crossed to the Egyptian side were people in need of medical treatment or those who hold an overseas stay only.
Revised:  Director of Gaza Strip border corssings Maher Abu Sabha said those who crossed to the Egyptian side were people in need of medical treatment or those who hold an overseas stay only.
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Original:  Director of Gaza Strip border corssings Maher Abu Sabha said those who crossed to the Egyptian side were people in need of medical treatment or those who hold an overseas stay  only.
Revised:  Director of Gaza Strip border corssings Maher Abu Sabha said those who crossed to the Egyptian side were people in need of medical treatment or who hold an overseas stay only.
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Original:  Director of Gaza Strip border corssings Maher Abu Sabha said those who crossed to the Egyptian side were people in need of medical treatment or those who hold an overseas stay  only.
Revised:  Director of Gaza Strip border corssings Maher Abu Sabha said those who crossed to the Egyptian side were people in need of medical treatment or those who hold an overseas stay permit, only.
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Original:  Following the attack and as part of the Egyptian authorities' long-term fight against in the Sinai peninsula, the Rafah border crossing had been closed and opened for only two days in the end of November.
Revised:  Following the attack and as part of the Egyptian authorities' long-term fight against in the Sinai peninsula, the Rafah border crossing was closed, and opened for only two days in the end of November.
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Original:  Following the attack and as part of the Egyptian authorities' long-term fight against in the Sinai peninsula, the Rafah border crossing was closed, and opened for only two days in the end of November.
Revised:  Following the attack and as part of the Egyptian authorities' long-term fight against in the Sinai peninsula, the Rafah border crossing was closed, and opened for only two days in late November.
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Original: In a first for the annual celebrations, soldiers from other countries joined in the parades, including former Soviet allies in the war: the United States, the United Kingdom, France, and Poland.
Revised: In a first for the annual celebrations, soldiers from other countries joined in the 90-minute parade, including those from former Soviet allies in the war: the United States, the United Kingdom, France, and Poland.
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Original:   Russian president Dmitriy Medvedev spoke during the celebrations at Red Square, as eleven thousand troops were assembling : "Only together can we counter present-day threats.
Revised:  Russian president Dmitriy Medvedev speaking during the celebrations at Red Square, as eleven thousand troops were assembling : "Only together can we counter present-day threats.
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Original: Dallas Braden  , a left-handed pitcher for Major League Baseball's Oakland Athletics, became one of only nineteen players in the history of the MLB to pitch a perfect game, in a 4-0 win against the Tampa Bay Rays.
Revised: Dallas Braden . Dallas Braden , a left-handed pitcher for Major League Baseball's Oakland Athletics, became one of only nineteen players in the history of the MLB to pitch a perfect game, in a 4-0 win against the Tampa Bay Rays.
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Original: ," said Braden in a post-game interview with MLB.com   
Revised: ," said Braden in a post-game interview with MLB.com . 
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Original:  Ironically, Braden's own mother died of skin cancer when he was a senior in high school, although his grandmother attended the game.
Revised:  Braden's own mother died of skin cancer when he was a senior in high school, although his grandmother attended the game.
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Original:  Braden's own mother died of skin cancer when he was a senior in high school, although his grandmother attended the game.
Revised:  Braden's own mother died of skin cancer when he was a senior in high school, but his grandmother attended the game.
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Original:  In the process of throwing the perfect game, Braden also struck out six Tampa Bay hitters.
Revised:  In the process of throwing the perfect game, Braden also six Tampa Bay hitters.
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Original: ," said Braden in a post-game interview with MLB.com .
Revised: ," said Braden in a post-game interview with .
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Original:  Moe (seen here), Leongatha and Wonthaggi are one game out of the finals.
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Original:  166.67\%) Maffra (four wins, one loss - 150.8\%) Sale (three wins, one loss, one bye - 126.32\%) Morwell (three wins, two losses - 115.62\%) Drouin (two wins, two losses, one bye - 128.28\%) Moe (one win, three losses, one bye - 85.58\%) Leongatha (one win, three losses, one bye - 68.82\%) Wonthaggi (one win, four losses - 46.68\%) Warragul (no wins, four wins , one bye - 48.6\%) Warragul lead Traralgon early in the third quarter but were quickly over taken and convincingly beaten.
Revised:  166.67\%) Maffra (four wins, one loss - 150.8\%) Sale (three wins, one loss, one bye - 126.32\%) Morwell (three wins, two losses - 115.62\%) Drouin (two wins, two losses, one bye - 128.28\%) Moe (one win, three losses, one bye - 85.58\%) Leongatha (one win, three losses, one bye - 68.82\%) Wonthaggi (one win, four losses - 46.68\%) Warragul (no wins, four losses , one bye - 48.6\%) Warragul lead Traralgon early in the third quarter but were quickly over taken and convincingly beaten.
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Original:  To that point, both defences dominated allowing a comibined .
Revised:  To that point, both defences dominated .
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Original:  From the fifth minute of the third quarter, the point of Warraguls only lead of the game , the game belonged to Traralgon.
Revised:  From the fifth minute of the third quarter, the game belonged to Traralgon.
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Original:  Tim Aitkin kicked six of his nine goals in the last qurter to help Traralgon stamp their authority on the game.
Revised:  Tim Aitkin kicked six of his nine goals in the last quarter to help Traralgon stamp their authority on the game.
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Original:  To that point , both defences dominated .
Revised:  To that point in the game, the defence of both sides dominated not allowing many scoring opportunities .
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Original:  The Gippsland Football League (officially Gippsland League) is the only major Australian rules football competition in the Gippsland region according to the Victorian Country Football League .
Revised:  The Gippsland Football League (officially Gippsland League) is the only major Australian rules football competition in the region according to the Victorian Country Football League .
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Original:  The Gippsland Football League (officially Gippsland League) is the only major Australian rules football competition in the Gippsland region according to the Victorian Country Football League .
Revised:  The Gippsland Football League (officially Gippsland League) is the only major Australian rules football competition in the Gippsland region according to the .
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Original: The United States has again lost in its continuing battle to strong arm the Canadian government into paying duties on softwood lumber . A NAFTA extraordinary challenge committee rejected U.S. allegations that an earlier ruling in support of Canada's position violated NAFTA rules.
Revised: The United States has lost another battle in the ongoing U.S.-Canada softwood lumber dispute . A NAFTA extraordinary challenge committee rejected U.S. allegations that an earlier ruling in support of Canada's position violated NAFTA rules.
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Original: The United States has again lost in its continuing battle to strong arm the Canadian government into paying duties on softwood lumber . A NAFTA extraordinary challenge committee rejected U.S. allegations that an earlier ruling in support of Canada's position violated NAFTA rules.
Revised: The United States has again lost in its continuing battle to strong arm the Canadian government into paying duties on softwood lumber . A NAFTA Extraordinary Challenge Committee (ECC) rejected U.S. allegations that an earlier ruling in support of Canada's position violated NAFTA rules.
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Original:  The also found that provincial stumpage programs provide a "financial benefit" to Canadian producers.
Revised:  They also found that provincial stumpage programs provide a "financial benefit" to Canadian producers.
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Original: Thirteen activists who manned four fast moving out-board motor boats  attempted to drive away  schools of fish before the Coast Guard arrived and ended their interference .
Revised: Thirteen activists who manned four fast moving out-board motor boats that attempted to drive away schools of fish before the Coast Guard arrived and ended their interference .
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Original: Thirteen activists who manned four fast moving out-board motor boats  attempted to drive away  schools of fish before the Coast Guard arrived and ended their interference .
Revised: Thirteen activists who manned four fast moving out-board motor boats attempted to drive away the schools of fish before the Coast Guard arrived and ended their interference .
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Original: Thirteen activists who manned four fast moving out-board motor boats  attempted to drive away  schools of fish before the Coast Guard arrived and ended their interference .
Revised: Thirteen activists who manned four fast moving out-board motor boats attempted to drive away schools of fish . The Coast Guard arrived and ended their interference .
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Original:  The Coast Guard arrived and ended their interference peacefully.
Revised:  The Coast Guard arrived and ended the interference peacefully.
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Original:  The Omega fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia, a top U.S. fishing port due their new presence, which recently opened there an enhanced processing plant .
Revised:  The fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia, a top U.S. fishing port due their new presence, which recently opened there an enhanced processing plant .
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Original:  The Omega fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia, a top U.S. fishing port due their new presence, which recently opened there an enhanced processing plant .
Revised:  The Omega fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia, a top U.S. fishing port due 
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Original:  The company take accounts for nearly 90\% of the entire East Coast menhaden catch.
Revised:  The company accounts for nearly 90\% of the entire East Coast menhaden catch.
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Original:  A coalition of recreational anglers and environmentalists, called Menhaden Matter, say the coast-wide population  Atlantic Menhaden has fallen to near record lows  .  ASMFC recently rejected an offer by Omega that would voluntarily cap their harvest at 135,000 metric tons annually for the next four years.
Revised:  A coalition of recreational anglers and environmentalists, called Menhaden Matter, say the coast-wide population of Atlantic Menhaden has fallen to near record lows . ASMFC recently rejected an offer by Omega that would voluntarily cap their harvest at 135,000 metric tons annually for the next four years.
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Original:  Greenpeace says the species is near historic lows and predators that depend on the fish as a food source, such as striped bass, are suffering from malnutrition and poor body condition .
Revised:  A public hearing is scheduled in Alexandria, Virginia in the next few days .
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Original:  Thirteen activists manned four fast moving out-board motor boats that attempted to drive away the schools of fish.
Revised:  Four fast moving out-board motor boats that attempted to drive away the schools of fish.
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Original:  Thirteen activists manned four fast moving out-board motor boats that attempted to drive away the schools of fish.
Revised:  Thirteen activists manned four fast moving out-board motor boats , manned by thirteen activists, attempted to drive away the schools of fish.
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Original:  Thirteen activists manned four fast moving out-board motor boats that attempted to drive away the schools of fish.
Revised:  Thirteen activists manned four fast moving out-board motor boats that attempted to drive away the fish.
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Original:  The Coast Guard arrived and ended the interference peacefully.
Revised:  The Coast Guard arrived and ended the confrontation peacefully.
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Original:  The fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia,  a top U.S. fishing port due to the new Omega processing plant opened there.
Revised:  The fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia, now a top U.S. fishing port due to the new Omega processing plant opened there.
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Original:  The fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia,  a top U.S. fishing port due to the new Omega processing plant opened there.
Revised:  The fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia, a top U.S. fishing port due to the recent Omega processing plant opened there.
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Original:  They are also, next to oysters, the prime filter feeder for bay waters.
Revised:  They are also, next to oysters, a prime filter feeder for bay waters.
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Original:  Bay oysters suffered dramatic depletion from disease over the last two decades.
Revised:  Bay oyster population suffered dramatic declines from disease over the last two decades.
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Original:  The Chesapeake Bay Foundation  had praise for Maryland Governor Robert Ehrlich  and the state’s Department of Natural Resources for securing a commitment from ASMFC to seek a cap on commercial harvesting of Atlantic Menhaden.
Revised:  The Chesapeake Bay Foundation had praise for Maryland Governor Robert Ehrlich , and the state’s Department of Natural Resources for securing a commitment from ASMFC to seek a cap on commercial harvesting of Atlantic Menhaden.
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Original:  The Chesapeake Bay Foundation  had praise for Maryland Governor Robert Ehrlich  and the state’s Department of Natural Resources for securing a commitment from ASMFC to seek a cap on commercial harvesting of Atlantic Menhaden.
Revised:  The Chesapeake Bay Foundation had praise for Maryland Governor Robert Ehrlich and the state’s Department of Natural Resources . They secured a commitment from ASMFC to seek a cap on commercial harvesting of Atlantic Menhaden.
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Original:  A coalition of recreational anglers and environmentalists, called Menhaden Matter, say the coast-wide population of Atlantic Menhaden has fallen to near record lows and are against an encroachment by Omega into bay waters.
Revised:  A coalition of recreational anglers and environmentalists, called Menhaden Matter, say the coast-wide population of Atlantic Menhaden has fallen to near record lows . They are against an encroachment by Omega into bay waters.
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Original:  The larger issue is a proposed cap on the catch by the Atlantic States Marine Fisheries Commission (ASMFC) .
Revised:  The issue is a proposed cap on the catch by the Atlantic States Marine Fisheries Commission (ASMFC) .
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Original:  The larger issue is a proposed cap on the catch by the Atlantic States Marine Fisheries Commission (ASMFC) .
Revised:  The larger issue is a proposed cap on the catch by ASMFC .
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Original:  The limit would apply to the Atlantic  and coastal in-land waters  of the fish species.
Revised:  The limit would apply to the Atlantic , and coastal in-land waters of the fish species.
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Original:  The limit would apply to the Atlantic  and coastal in-land waters  of the fish species.
Revised:  The limit would apply to the Atlantic and coastal in-land waters , of the fish species.
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Original:  The cap is proposed for the years 2006 and 2007  and open to public debate and input.
Revised:  The cap is proposed for the years 2006 and 2007 , and open to public debate and input.
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Original: The Omega fishing fleet consisted of two spotter planes and four large boats with eight tenders.
Revised: The Omega fleet consisted of two spotter planes and four large boats with eight tenders.
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Original: The Omega fishing fleet consisted of two spotter planes and four large boats with eight tenders.
Revised: The Omega fishing fleet consisted of two spotter planes and four fishing boats with eight tenders.
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Original:  Four fast moving out-board motor boats, manned by thirteen activists,  attempted to drive away the fish.
Revised:  Four fast moving out-board motor boats, manned by thirteen activists, who attempted to drive away the fish.
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Original:  The Coast Guard arrived and ended the confrontation peacefully.
Revised:  The Coast Guard was called in and ended the confrontation peacefully.
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Original:  The fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia, now a top U.S. fishing port due to the recent Omega processing plant opened there.
Revised:  Their fleet is out of Reedville, Virginia, now a top U.S. fishing port due to the recent Omega processing plant opened there.
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Original:  Chesapeake Bay menhaden are considered an important food source for popular sport fish .
Revised:  Chesapeake Bay menhaden are considered an important food source for fish species popular with sports fisherman .
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Original:  They are also, next to oysters, a prime filter feeder for bay waters.
Revised:  They are also, next to oysters, a prime filter feeder in bay waters.
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Original:  Studies , still inconclusive , are trying to determine the overall number of bay menhaden.
Revised:  Studies of menhaden populations are still inconclusive as scientists try to determine the overall number of bay menhaden.
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Original:  They are  against an encroachment by Omega into bay waters.
Revised:  They are also against an encroachment by Omega into bay waters.
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Original:  The issue is a proposed cap on the catch by ASMFC . The Board recommended a Draft Addendum to limit the menhaden catch 110,400 metric tons, which is the average over the last five years of declining fishing harvests for the species.
Revised:  The issue is a cap proposed by ASMFC on the menhaden harvest . The Board recommended a Draft Addendum to limit the menhaden catch 110,400 metric tons, which is the average over the last five years of declining fishing harvests for the species.
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Original:  The issue is a proposed cap on the catch by ASMFC . The Board recommended a Draft Addendum to limit the menhaden catch 110,400 metric tons, which is the average over the last five years of declining fishing harvests for the species.
Revised:  The issue is a proposed cap on the catch by ASMFC . The Board recommended a Draft Addendum to limit the menhaden harvest to 110,400 metric tons, which is the average over the last five years of declining fishing harvests for the species.
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Original:  The issue is a proposed cap on the catch by ASMFC . The Board recommended a Draft Addendum to limit the menhaden catch 110,400 metric tons, which is the average over the last five years of declining fishing harvests for the species.
Revised:  The issue is a proposed cap on the catch by ASMFC . The Board recommended a Draft Addendum to limit the menhaden catch 110,400 metric tons, which is the average over five years of declining fishing harvests for the species.
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Original:  The issue is a proposed cap on the catch by ASMFC . The Board recommended a Draft Addendum to limit the menhaden catch 110,400 metric tons, which is the average over the last five years of declining fishing harvests for the species.
Revised:  The issue is a proposed cap on the catch by ASMFC . The Board recommended a Draft Addendum to limit the menhaden catch 110,400 metric tons, which is the average over the last five years of consecutive declines in harvests for the species.
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Original:  The limit would apply to the Atlantic , and coastal in-land waters , of the fish species.
Revised:  The limit would apply to Atlantic and in-land waters , of the fish species.
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Original:  The limit would apply to the Atlantic , and coastal in-land waters , of the fish species.
Revised:  The limit would apply to the Atlantic , and coastal in-land waters of the species.
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Original:  The cap is proposed for the years 2006 and 2007 , and open to public debate and input . ASMFC recently rejected an offer by Omega that would voluntarily cap their harvest at 135,000 metric tons annually for the next four years.
Revised:  The proposed cap is for years 2006 and 2007 , and open to public debate and input . ASMFC recently rejected an offer by Omega that would voluntarily cap their harvest at 135,000 metric tons annually for the next four years.
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Original:  The cap is proposed for the years 2006 and 2007 , and open to public debate and input . ASMFC recently rejected an offer by Omega that would voluntarily cap their harvest at 135,000 metric tons annually for the next four years.
Revised:  The cap is proposed for the years 2006 and 2007 and open to public debate and input . ASMFC recently rejected an offer by Omega that would voluntarily cap their harvest at 135,000 metric tons annually for the next four years.
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Original:  The cap is proposed for the years 2006 and 2007 , and open to public debate and input . ASMFC recently rejected an offer by Omega that would voluntarily cap their harvest at 135,000 metric tons annually for the next four years.
Revised:  The cap is proposed for the years 2006 and 2007 , and open to public debate . ASMFC recently rejected an offer by Omega that would voluntarily cap their harvest at 135,000 metric tons annually for the next four years.
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Original:  They also note that Omega seeks to reopen state waters in Maryland and New Jersey , which are currently closed to industrial purse seine operations.
Revised:  They noted Omega also seeks to reopen state waters in Maryland and New Jersey , which are currently closed to industrial purse seine operations.
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Original:  They also note that Omega seeks to reopen state waters in Maryland and New Jersey , which are currently closed to industrial purse seine operations.
Revised:  They also note that Omega seeks to reopen some waters in Maryland and New Jersey , which are currently closed to industrial purse seine operations.
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Original:  They also note that Omega seeks to reopen state waters in Maryland and New Jersey , which are currently closed to industrial purse seine operations.
Revised:  They also note that Omega seeks to reopen state waters in Maryland and New Jersey which are currently closed to industrial purse seine operations.
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Original:  Omega says that ASMFC’s own reports indicate the Atlantic stock of menhaden is healthy.
Revised:  Omega says that ASMFC’s own reports indicate the population levels of Atlantic menhaden are healthy.
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Original: The Chesapeake Bay Foundation, a not-for-profit organization, had praise for Maryland Governor Robert Ehrlich, and the state ’ s Department of Natural Resources.
Revised: The Chesapeake Bay Foundation, a not-for-profit organization, had praise for Maryland Governor Robert Ehrlich, and the state ' s Department of Natural Resources.
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