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Original: While they  delivering the 15th D P Kohli Memorial Lecture for CBI on "Eclipse at Noon: Shadows Over India's Conscience" with nearly 3000 officers of the agency in the audience, Gandhi noted that "The CBI is seen as the government's hatchet, rather than honesty's ally.
Revised: While they were delivering the 15th D P Kohli Memorial Lecture for CBI on "Eclipse at Noon: Shadows Over India's Conscience" with nearly 3000 officers of the agency in the audience, Gandhi noted that "The CBI is seen as the government's hatchet, rather than honesty's ally.
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Original: While they were delivering the 15th D P Kohli Memorial Lecture for CBI on "Eclipse at Noon: Shadows Over India's Conscience" with nearly 3000 officers of the agency in the audience, Gandhi noted that "The CBI is seen as the government's hatchet, rather than honesty's ally.
Revised: While delivering the 15th D P Kohli Memorial Lecture for CBI on "Eclipse at Noon: Shadows Over India's Conscience" with nearly 3000 officers of the agency in the audience, Gandhi noted that "The CBI is seen as the government's hatchet, rather than honesty's ally.
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Original: Franck Bouyer (born March 17, 1974 in Beaupréau) is a French  professional road bicycle racer for who races for . Bouyer suffers from narcolepsy, resulting in sudden sleep attacks and cataplexy, and was unable to compete or train without Modafinil.
Revised: Franck Bouyer (born March 17, 1974 in Beaupréau) is a French former professional road bicycle racer for who races for . Bouyer suffers from narcolepsy, resulting in sudden sleep attacks and cataplexy, and was unable to compete or train without Modafinil.
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Original:  Bouyer will retire at the end of the 2013 season.
Revised:  Bouyer retired at the end of the 2013 season.
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Original: Franck Bouyer (born March 17 , 1974 in Beaupréau) is a French former professional road bicycle racer, who competed as a professional between 1995 and 2013.
Revised: Franck Bouyer (born 17 , 1974 in Beaupréau) is a French former professional road bicycle racer, who competed as a professional between 1995 and 2013.
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Original:  After confirmation from the UCI that a new drug for treating narcolepsy (Xyrem) was not on the banned list, he signed again for the team for the 2009 URL
Revised:  After confirmation from the UCI that a new drug for treating narcolepsy (Xyrem) was not on the banned list, he signed again for the team for the 2009 season.
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Original: Franck Bouyer (born 17 March 1974  in Beaupréau) is a French former professional road bicycle racer, who competed as a professional between 1995 and 2013.
Revised: Franck Bouyer (born 17 March 1974 , in Beaupréau) is a French former professional road bicycle racer, who competed as a professional between 1995 and 2013.
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Original:  Bouyer competed for the Castorama, Agrigel ,  ,  and squads during his career.
Revised:  Bouyer competed for the Castorama, Agrigel , , , and squads during his career.
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Original:  Palmares 1999 
Revised:  Career achievements Major results 1999 
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Original: 1st Tour de Vendée 2nd Grand Prix de Cholet-Pays de Loire 3rd Trophée des Grimpeurs 5th Boucles de l'Aulne 10th Overall Tour du Limousin 10th Tour du Haut Var 2003 2nd Grand Prix de Cholet-Pays de Loire 3rd Overall Étoile de Bessèges 7th Tour du Finistère 2004 1st Paris-Camembert 2nd Overall Circuit de la Sarthe 1st Stage 1 4th Tour de Vendée 2010 1st Overall Tour de Bretagne 2011 9th Overall Boucles de la Mayenne 2013 7th Overall Boucles de la Mayenne    References Category:
Revised: 1st Tour de Vendée 2nd Grand Prix de Cholet-Pays de Loire 3rd Trophée des Grimpeurs 5th Boucles de l'Aulne 10th Overall Tour du Limousin 10th Tour du Haut Var 2003 2nd Grand Prix de Cholet-Pays de Loire 3rd Overall Étoile de Bessèges 7th Tour du Finistère 2004 1st Paris–Camembert 2nd Overall Circuit de la Sarthe 1st Stage 1 4th Tour de Vendée 2010 1st Overall Tour de Bretagne 2011 9th Overall Boucles de la Mayenne 2013 7th Overall Boucles de la Mayenne References Category:
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Original:  Department of Psychology, University of Aarhus, Denmark Incubation is defined as a process of unconscious recombination of thought elements that were stimulated through conscious work at one point in time, resulting in novel ideas at some later point in time.
Revised:  Department of Psychology, University of Aarhus, Denmark Incubation is defined as a process of unconscious recombination of thought elements that were stimulated throughconscious work at one point in time, resulting in novel ideas at some later point in time.
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Original:   Christensen, T. Bo (2005).
Revised:  <ref> Christensen, T. Bo (2005).
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Original:  <ref> Christensen, T. Bo (2005).
Revised:  Christensen, T. Bo (2005).
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Original:  URL on is defined as, when attending to a different task, humans forget about the previous unsuccessful attempts and can engage with the task anew, often leading to finding the solution.
Revised:  on is defined as, when attending to a different task, humans forget about the previous unsuccessful attempts and can engage with the task anew, often leading to finding the solution.
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Original:  Department of Psychology, University of Aarhus, Denmark Incubation is defined as, when attending to a different task, humans forget about the previous unsuccessful attempts and can engage with the task anew, often leading to finding the solution.
Revised:  Department of Psychology, University of Aarhus, Denmark 
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Original: He was baptized by Robert Morrison on Macao . on July 16, 1814, becoming the 1st Protestant convert in mainland China.
Revised: He was baptized by Robert Morrison on Macao on July 16, 1814, becoming the 1st Protestant convert in mainland China.
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Original: He was baptized by Robert Morrison on Macao on July 16, 1814, becoming the 1st Protestant convert in mainland China.
Revised: He was baptized by Robert Morrison on Macao on July 16, 1814, becoming the first Protestant convert in mainland China.
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Original:  The allegation could explain the coincidental position of two Spanish warships off the coast of Equatorial Guinea, at the time of the arrests of the alleged plotters.
Revised:  The allegation could explain the position of two Spanish warships off the coast of Equatorial Guinea, at the time of the arrests of the alleged plotters.
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Original:  THe country also contained unexploited reserves of gold, manganese and URL Prosecutors said Equatorial Guinea's opposition leader, Severo Moto, based in Spain, offered the group $1.8m and oil rights to overthrow the government.
Revised:  THe country also contained unexploited reserves of gold, manganese and uranium. Prosecutors said Equatorial Guinea's opposition leader, Severo Moto, based in Spain, offered the group $1.8m and oil rights to overthrow the government.
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Original:  THe country also contained unexploited reserves of gold, manganese and uranium.
Revised:  The country also contained unexploited reserves of gold, manganese and uranium.
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Original:  Prosecutors alleged that Moto was to be installed as the new president in return for preferential oil rights to corporations affiliated to those involved with the coup.
Revised:  Prosecutors alleged that Moto was to be installed as the new president in return for preferential oil rights to corporations affiliated to those involved in the coup.
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Original:  Jack Straw and minister for Africa Chris Mullin were however personally told of the plot on Friday, 30 January.
Revised:  Jack Straw and minister for Africa Chris Mullin were , however, personally told of the plot on Friday, 30 January.
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Original:   Its offices are based in London.
Revised:  . Its offices are based in London.
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Original: Jennings  (2005) also discussed the book.
Revised: Jennings (2005) 
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Original:  As a practice for achieving balance, slow reading often involves reading  light material at a relaxed pace for pleasure, and not just complex materials read slowly for insight .
Revised:  As a practice for achieving balance, slow reading often involves reading light material at a relaxed pace for pleasure, reading complex materials slowly for insight .
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Original:  Research A number of research studies exist on the problematic aspects of involuntary slow reading .
Revised:  Research While there is susbstantial research about involuntary slow reading .
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Original:  A few studies demonstrate the positive value of voluntary slow reading , the type of reading defined in this entry . Nell (1988) showed that there is substantial rate variability during natural reading, with most-liked pages being read significantly slower.
Revised:  A few studies demonstrate the positive value of voluntary slow reading . Nell (1988) showed that there is substantial rate variability during natural reading, with most-liked pages being read significantly slower.
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Original:  Of less common usage is the term, "deep reading" (Birkerts, 1994).
Revised:  Of less common usage is the term, "deep reading" Birkerts, Sven. ( 1994).
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Original:    Slow reading is contrasted with speed reading which involves techniques to increase the rate of reading without adversely affecting comprehension, and contrasted with skimming which employs visual page cues to increase reading speed.
Revised:  . Slow reading is contrasted with speed reading which involves techniques to increase the rate of reading without adversely affecting comprehension, and contrasted with skimming which employs visual page cues to increase reading speed.
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Original:  The earliest reference to slow reading appears to be in Nietzsche's ( 1887 ) preface to Daybreak: "It is not for nothing that one has been a philologist, perhaps one is a philologist still, that is to say, a teacher of slow reading."
Revised:  The earliest reference to slow reading appears to be in Nietzsche's preface to the 1887 ) preface to Daybreak: "It is not for nothing that one has been a philologist, perhaps one is a philologist still, that is to say, a teacher of slow reading."
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Original:  The earliest reference to slow reading appears to be in Nietzsche's ( 1887 ) preface to Daybreak: "It is not for nothing that one has been a philologist, perhaps one is a philologist still, that is to say, a teacher of slow reading."
Revised:  The earliest reference to slow reading appears to be in Nietzsche's ( 1887 Daybreak: "It is not for nothing that one has been a philologist, perhaps one is a philologist still, that is to say, a teacher of slow reading."
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Original:  A similar view was stated by Postman (1985) who noted the character of the ordinary citizen of the 19th century, a mind that could listen for hours on end to political orations clearly shaped by a culture favouring text.
Revised:  A similar view was stated by Postman , who noted the character of the ordinary citizen of the 19th century, a mind that could listen for hours on end to political orations clearly shaped by a culture favouring text.
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Original:  Why not slow reading?"  (2007) . Books
Revised:  Why not slow reading?" (2007) . Further reading
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Original:  Selected passages, Open Book Systems] Slow reading is contrasted with speed reading which involves techniques to increase the rate of reading without adversely affecting comprehension, and contrasted with skimming which employs visual page cues to increase reading speed. 
Revised:  Selected passages, Open Book Systems] Slow reading is contrasted with speed reading which involves techniques to increase the rate of reading without adversely affecting comprehension, and contrasted with skimming which employs visual page cues to increase reading speed. URL
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Original: "Friedrich Nietzsche, (1887) Morgenröte:Gedanken über die moralischen Vorurteile (1881).
Revised: "Friedrich Nietzsche, (1887) Morgenro:te: Gedanken u:ber die moralischen Vorurteile (1881).
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Original:  "Man ist nicht umsonst Philologe gewesen, man ist es vielleicht noch, das will sagen, ein Lehrer des langsamen Lesens: — endlich schreibt man auch langsam.
Revised:  "Man ist nicht umsonst Philologe gewesen, man ist es vielleicht noch, das will sagen, ein Lehrer des langsamen Lesens: - endlich schreibt man auch langsam.
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Original:  Birkerts, in his book The Gutenberg Ellegies , stated "Reading, because we control it, is adaptable to our needs and rhythms.
Revised:  Birkerts, in his book The Gutenberg Elegies , stated "Reading, because we control it, is adaptable to our needs and rhythms.
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Original: y Góngora is Viceroy of New Granada 1783 José Celestino Mutis leads the Botany expedition  1786 Death of indigenous leader Cacique Calarcá in combats against the Spanish forces in Peñas Blancas 1788 Francisco Gil de Taboada y Lemos is Viceroy of New Granada 1789 José Manuel de Ezpeleta is Viceroy of New Granada 1797 2 January Pedro Mendinueta y Múzquiz is Viceroy of New Granada 1799 Research expedition of Alexander Von Humboldt exploring the courses of the Orinoco river and Magdalena river
Revised: y Góngora is Viceroy of New Granada 1783 José Celestino Mutis leads the Botany expedition . 1786 Death of indigenous leader Cacique Calarcá in combats against the Spanish forces in Peñas Blancas 1788 Francisco Gil de Taboada y Lemos is Viceroy of New Granada 1789 José Manuel de Ezpeleta is Viceroy of New Granada 1797 2 January Pedro Mendinueta y Múzquiz is Viceroy of New Granada 1799 Research expedition of Alexander Von Humboldt exploring the courses of the Orinoco river and Magdalena river
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Original:  is built 1761 Pedro Messía de la Cerda is Viceroy of New Granada 1772 Manuel de Guirior is Viceroy of New Granada 1773 Foundation of San Jose de Cúcuta by Juana Rangel de Cuellar 1776 26 November Manuel Antonio Flores is Viceroy of New Granada 1780 Manuela Beltrán organized a peasant revolt against excessive taxation 1782 1 April Juan de Torrezar Díaz Pimienta is Viceroy of New Granada Antonio Caballero y Góngora is Viceroy of New Granada 1783 José Celestino Mutis leads the Botany expedition.
Revised:  is built 1761 Pedro Messía de la Cerda is Viceroy of New Granada 1772 Manuel de Guirior is Viceroy of New Granada 1773 Foundation of San Jose de Cúcuta by Juana Rangel de Cuellar 1776 26 November Manuel Antonio Flores is Viceroy of New Granada 1780 Manuela Beltrán organized a peasant revolt against excessive taxation 1782 1 April Juan de Torrezar Díaz Pimienta is Viceroy of New Granada Antonio Caballero y Góngora is Viceroy of New Granada 1783 José Celestino Mutis leads the Botanic expedition.
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Original: y Góngora is Viceroy of New Granada 1783 José Celestino Mutis leads the Botanic expedition . 1786 Death of indigenous leader Cacique Calarcá in combats against the Spanish forces in Peñas Blancas 1788 Francisco Gil de Taboada y Lemos is Viceroy of New Granada 1789 José Manuel de Ezpeleta is Viceroy of New Granada 1797 2 January Pedro Mendinueta y Múzquiz is Viceroy of New Granada 1799 Research expedition of Alexander Von Humboldt exploring the courses of the Orinoco river and Magdalena river
Revised: y Góngora is Viceroy of New Granada 1783 José Celestino Mutis leads the Royal Botanical Expedition to New Granada . 1786 Death of indigenous leader Cacique Calarcá in combats against the Spanish forces in Peñas Blancas 1788 Francisco Gil de Taboada y Lemos is Viceroy of New Granada 1789 José Manuel de Ezpeleta is Viceroy of New Granada 1797 2 January Pedro Mendinueta y Múzquiz is Viceroy of New Granada 1799 Research expedition of Alexander Von Humboldt exploring the courses of the Orinoco river and Magdalena river
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Original: BBC: Deadly blasts in Colombia , 8 April 2002 11 April Two police officers and a girl are killed by a bomb concealed in the corpse of a peasant (Pedro Nel Camacho) apparently executed by the FARC guerrilla with such purpose URL 12 April 12 politicians in Valle del Cauca are kidnapped using a hoax antibomb operative, starting the Valle del Cauca Deputies hostage crisis A rocket explodes near the studios of RCN TV in Bogotá.
Revised: BBC: Deadly blasts in Colombia , 8 April 2002 11 April Two police officers and a girl are killed by a bomb concealed in the corpse of a peasant (Pedro Nel Camacho) apparently executed by the FARC guerrilla with such purpose 12 April 12 politicians in Valle del Cauca are kidnapped using a hoax antibomb operative, starting the Valle del Cauca Deputies hostage crisis A rocket explodes near the studios of RCN TV in Bogotá.
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Original:  1786 Death of indigenous leader Cacique Calarcá in combats against the Spanish forces in Peñas Blancas 1788 Francisco Gil de Taboada y Lemos is Viceroy of New Granada 1789 José Manuel de Ezpeleta is Viceroy of New Granada 1797 2 January Pedro Mendinueta y Múzquiz is Viceroy of New Granada 1799 Research expedition of Alexander Von Humboldt exploring the courses of the Orinoco river and Magdalena river
Revised:  1786 Death of indigenous leader Cacique Calarcá in combats against the Spanish forces in Peñas Blancas 1788 Francisco Gil de Taboada y Lemos is Viceroy of New Granada 1789 José Manuel de Ezpeleta is Viceroy of New Granada 1797 2 January Pedro Mendinueta y Múzquiz is Viceroy of New Granada 1799 Research expedition of Alexander von Humboldt exploring the courses of the Orinoco river and Magdalena river
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Original:  1786 Death of indigenous leader Cacique Calarcá in combats against the Spanish forces in Peñas Blancas 1788 Francisco Gil de Taboada y Lemos is Viceroy of New Granada 1789 José Manuel de Ezpeleta is Viceroy of New Granada 1797 2 January Pedro Mendinueta y Múzquiz is Viceroy of New Granada 1799 Research expedition of Alexander Von Humboldt exploring the courses of the Orinoco river and Magdalena river
Revised:  1786 Death of indigenous leader Cacique Calarcá in combats against the Spanish forces in Peñas Blancas 1788 Francisco Gil de Taboada y Lemos is Viceroy of New Granada 1789 José Manuel de Ezpeleta is Viceroy of New Granada 1797 2 January Pedro Mendinueta y Múzquiz is Viceroy of New Granada 1799 Research expedition of Alexander Von Humboldt exploring the courses of the Orinoco River and Magdalena River
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Original: Simon Bolívar 
Revised: Simón Bolívar 
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Original: Mariano Mosquera y Arboleda is President of the Republic of New Granada 1832 10 March José Ignacio de Márquez is President of the Republic of New Granada 7 October Francisco de Paula Santander is President of the Republic of New Granada Coat of Arms of Colombia is officially adopted 1835 Start the Colombian coffee industry with the first commercial crops in Norte de Santander 1837 Colombian peso replaces Colombian real as official currency 1839 The War of the Supremes (Spanish:
Revised: Mariano Mosquera y Arboleda is President of the Republic of New Granada 1832 10 March José Ignacio de Márquez is President of the Republic of New Granada 7 October Francisco de Paula Santander is President of the Republic of New Granada Coat of arms of Colombia is officially adopted 1835 Start the Colombian coffee industry with the first commercial crops in Norte de Santander 1837 Colombian peso replaces Colombian real as official currency 1839 The War of the Supremes (Spanish:
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Original:  Colombia ) by Jesus Maria Ocampo 1891 5 November Colombian National Police is created 1892 7 August Miguel Antonio Caro is the 4th president of Colombia 29 September Rafael Nuñez is the 5th President of Colombia 1894 18 September Miguel Antonio Caro is the 6th president of Colombia 1896 26 May Poet José Asunción Silva commits suicide 1898 Manuel Antonio Sanclemente is the 7th president of Colombia 1899 17 October The Thousand Days  War (1899–1902)(1130 days) (Spanish:
Revised:  Colombia ) by Jesus Maria Ocampo 1891 5 November Colombian National Police is created 1892 7 August Miguel Antonio Caro is the 4th president of Colombia 29 September Rafael Nuñez is the 5th President of Colombia 1894 18 September Miguel Antonio Caro is the 6th president of Colombia 1896 26 May Poet José Asunción Silva commits suicide 1898 Manuel Antonio Sanclemente is the 7th president of Colombia 1899 17 October The Thousand Days ' War (1899–1902)(1130 days) (Spanish:
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Original:  31 July José Manuel Marroquín is president of Colombia August Naturalist Soto Grimshaw dies of cholera during an expedition to the Caribbean Region of Colombia
Revised:  31 July José Manuel Marroquín is president of Colombia August Naturalist Soto Grimshaw dies of cholera during an expedition to the Caribbean region of Colombia
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Original:  Hunzahúa becomes zaque of Hunza (to 1470) 1470 Saguamanchica becomes zipa of Bacatá (to 1490) Michuá becomes zaque of Hunza (to 1490) 1490 Battle of Chocontá Nemequene becomes zipa of Bacatá (to 1514) Quemuenchatocha becomes zaque of Hunza (to 1537) 1492 Inca Empire invades southwest Colombia 1498 Spanish explorer Juan de la Cosa lands on what is today called Cabo de la Vela (Cape of Sails) in the Guajira Peninsula 1500 Rodrigo de Bastidas discovers the Colombian Caribbean coast
Revised:  Hunzahúa becomes zaque of Hunza (to 1470) 1470 Saguamanchica becomes zipa of Bacatá (to 1490) Michuá becomes zaque of Hunza (to 1490) 1490 Battle of Chocontá Nemequene becomes zipa of Bacatá (to 1514) Quemuenchatocha becomes zaque of Hunza (to 1537) 1492 Inca Empire invades southwest Colombia 1498 Spanish explorer Juan de la Cosa lands on what is today called Cabo de la Vela (Cape of Sails) in the Guajira Peninsula 1500 Rodrigo de Bastidas lands on the Colombian Caribbean coast
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Original: Equipment On a fast packing trip luxury items should be left at home and in addition cut extra straps and "make sure everything you bring serves a dual purpose.
Revised: Equipment On a fast packing trip luxury items are left at home and in addition cut extra straps and "make sure everything you bring serves a dual purpose.
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Original:  ” That means, for example , that clothes worn during the day should also be worn at nightclothes for extra warmth ;
Revised:  ” That means, for example , that clothes worn during the day are worn at night for extra warmth ;
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Original:  this also "means you can pack a lighter sleeping  URL "Hike Fast, Sleep Har: Are You Ready To Try Fastpacking?" AMC.
Revised:  this also "means you can pack a lighter sleeping bag is URL "Hike Fast, Sleep Har: Are You Ready To Try Fastpacking?" AMC.
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Original: Fastpacking involves running a covering a considerable distance over several days with a pack, which requires both mental and physical strength.
Revised: Fastpacking involves covering a considerable distance over several days with a pack, which requires both mental and physical strength.
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Original:  " it is hiking the ups, jogging the flats, and running the downs," depending on the gradient, because of the weight carried.
Revised:  " hiking the ups, jogging the flats, and running the downs," depending on the gradient, because of the weight carried.
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Original:  Established, well-traveled long distance trail are used because "with minimal extra food and clothing, getting stuck in the backcountry for an extended period of time can quickly become a dangerous proposition".
Revised:  Established, well-traveled long distance trails are used because "with minimal extra food and clothing, getting stuck in the backcountry for an extended period of time can quickly become a dangerous proposition".
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