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Original:  There will be a public meeting about the heritage and mural project at 7.30 pm this Tuesday (21 September), at the Neighbourhood Centre, 39 Tottenham Street.
Revised: The mural restoration will be just one part of a year long project of heritage and conservation awareness-raising. "The project is not just about the mural but also wider plans to promote awareness of heritage and conservation in an area of London under threat from commercial development. In fact the bulk of the project is about the heritage and conservation and the mural is just one part of it, and the most visible because of its situation," said Mr Whyatt. There will be a public meeting about the heritage and mural project at 7.30 pm this Tuesday (21 September), at the Neighbourhood Centre, 39 Tottenham Street.
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Original:  Today he told Wikinews he had a number of concerns about the possible success of the project.
Revised:  Yesterday he told Wikinews he had a number of concerns about the possible success of the project.
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Original:  In fact the bulk of the project is about the heritage and conservation and the mural is just one part of it, and the most visible because of its situation," said Mr Whyatt .
Revised:  In fact the bulk of the project is about the heritage and conservation and the mural is just one part of it, and the most visible because of its situation," Mr Whyatt later added .
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Original: There is also a caricature of poet Dylan Thomas, who lived in Fitzrovia,  a mocking portrayal of then leader of the Greater London Council, Conservative politician Horace Cutler, who is pictured as a bat-like creature.
Revised: There is also a caricature of poet Dylan Thomas, who lived in Fitzrovia, and a mocking portrayal of then leader of the Greater London Council, Conservative politician Horace Cutler, who is pictured as a bat-like creature.
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Original: One of London's most well known murals could be restored after years of neglect if plans by a group of community activists gain public support.
Revised: One of London's most well known could be restored after years of neglect if plans by a group of community activists gain public support.
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Original: The event was broadcasted by the local radio stations Entre Olas, Atardecer and Somos Pichilemu.
Revised: The event was broadcast by the local radio stations Entre Olas, Atardecer and Somos Pichilemu.
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Original: A man has died , another man has been injured and a woman has also been injured as the result of a road traffic accident in Somerset, England, United Kingdom.
Revised: A man has died and another man and a woman has also been injured as the result of a road traffic accident in Somerset, England, United Kingdom.
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Original: A man has died , another man has been injured and a woman has also been injured as the result of a road traffic accident in Somerset, England, United Kingdom.
Revised: A man has died , another man has been injured and a woman are injured after a road traffic accident in Somerset, England, United Kingdom.
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Original:  At approximately 0200 British Summer Time ( 0100 UTC) on Saturday , a BMW 328 that was carrying the three occupants on the A370 road in East Brent - close to the location of Burnham-on-Sea - impacted with a telegraph pole before becoming stationary in a hedge and subsequently went on fire.
Revised:  At approximately 0200 British Summer Time ( 0100 UTC) on Saturday , a BMW 328 that was carrying the three along the A370 road in East Brent - close to the location of Burnham-on-Sea - impacted with a telegraph pole before becoming stationary in a hedge and subsequently went on fire.
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Original:  At approximately 0200 British Summer Time ( 0100 UTC) on Saturday , a BMW 328 that was carrying the three occupants on the A370 road in East Brent - close to the location of Burnham-on-Sea - impacted with a telegraph pole before becoming stationary in a hedge and subsequently went on fire.
Revised:  At approximately 0200 British Summer Time ( 0100 UTC) on Saturday , a BMW 328 that was carrying the three occupants on the A370 road in East Brent - close to the location of Burnham-on-Sea - struck a telegraph pole before becoming stationary in a hedge and subsequently went on fire.
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Original:  At approximately 0200 British Summer Time ( 0100 UTC) on Saturday , a BMW 328 that was carrying the three occupants on the A370 road in East Brent - close to the location of Burnham-on-Sea - impacted with a telegraph pole before becoming stationary in a hedge and subsequently went on fire.
Revised:  At approximately 0200 British Summer Time ( 0100 UTC) on Saturday , a BMW 328 that was carrying the three occupants on the A370 road in East Brent - close to the location of Burnham-on-Sea - impacted with a telegraph pole before becoming stationary in a hedge and subsequently caught fire.
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Original:  The road - which electricity cables had fallen onto - was closed down for approximately nine hours, with the fire service and the police being present.
Revised:  The road - which electricity cables had fallen onto - was closed down for approximately nine hours, with the fire service and police present.
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Original:  It is thought that the A road has now become open again .
Revised:  It is thought that the A-road has now been re-opened .
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Original:  The police have commenced an investigation to attempt to establish what eventshappened
Revised:  The police have commenced an investigation to attempt to establish the chain of events
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Original: < Since last Thursday’s surprise meeting between Israeli Foreign Minister Silvan Shalom and Pakistani Foreign Minister Khursheed Kasuri in Istanbul, Turkey, both the governments of Israel and Pakistan at various times played up and played down the impression that full diplomatic relations, while not on the immediate horizon, were certainly on their way to development.
Revised:  Since last Thursday’s surprise meeting between Israeli Foreign Minister Silvan Shalom and Pakistani Foreign Minister Khursheed Kasuri in Istanbul, Turkey, both the governments of Israel and Pakistan at various times played up and played down the impression that full diplomatic relations, while not on the immediate horizon, were certainly on their way to development.
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Original:  For its part, Israel wishes to develop and/or improve relations with Arab and Islamic countries, though Israel itself must tread carefully so as to not damage relations with New Delhi .
Revised:  For its part, Israel wishes to develop and/or improve relations with Arab and Islamic countries, though Israel itself must tread carefully so as to not damage relations with New Delhi 
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Original:  For its part, Israel wishes to develop and/or improve relations with Arab and Islamic countries, though Israel itself must tread carefully so as to not damage relations with New Delhi  
Revised:  For its part, Israel wishes to develop and/or improve relations with Arab and Islamic countries, though Israel itself must tread carefully so as to not damage relations with New Delhi . 
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Original:  Though the account remains frozen at the moment, Kyanka and Paypal are attempting to work things out, with Kyanka faxing various documents to the company in order to re-open the account and resume the donation service .
Revised:  Though the account remains frozen at the moment, Kyanka and PayPal are attempting to work things out, with Kyanka faxing various documents to the company in order to re-open the account and resume the donation service .
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Original: right Online money transfer company PayPal is reportedly blocking over $20,000 in donations from  website Something Awful  intended for the American Red Cross ' hurricane relief efforts.
Revised: right Online money transfer company PayPal is reportedly blocking over $20,000 in donations from the website Something Awful intended for the American Red Cross ' hurricane relief efforts.
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Original:  Though the account remains frozen at the moment, Kyanka and PayPal are attempting to work things out, with Kyanka faxing various documents to the company in order to prove the legitimacy of the drive.
Revised:  The account remains frozen at the moment, Kyanka and PayPal are attempting to work things out, with Kyanka faxing various documents to the company in order to prove the legitimacy of the drive.
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Original:  Though the account remains frozen at the moment, Kyanka and PayPal are attempting to work things out, with Kyanka faxing various documents to the company in order to prove the legitimacy of the drive.
Revised:  Though the account remains frozen . Kyanka is attempting to solve the problem by faxing various documents to the company in order to prove the legitimacy of the drive.
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Original:  Though the account remains frozen at the moment, Kyanka and PayPal are attempting to work things out, with Kyanka faxing various documents to the company in order to prove the legitimacy of the drive.
Revised:  Though the account remains frozen at the moment, Kyanka and PayPal are attempting to work things out, with Kyanka faxing various documents to PayPal in order to prove the legitimacy of the drive.
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Original:  According to recent updates posted on the Something Awful website, Kyanka is requesting that PayPal refund any donations sent to the frozen account and requires members to use an alternative link to donate directly to Red Cross if they wish to do so.
Revised:  According to recent updates posted on the Something Awful website, Kyanka is requesting that PayPal refund any donations sent to the frozen account and require members to use an alternative link to donate directly to Red Cross if they wish to do so.
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Original:  Something Awful's webservers were located in New Orleans when Hurricane Katrina hit
Revised:  The Something Awful webservers are located in New Orleans when Hurricane Katrina hit
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Original:  Something Awful's webservers were located in New Orleans when Hurricane Katrina hit
Revised:  Something Awful's webservers were located in New Orleans where Hurricane Katrina hit
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Original:  The reason for this, according to Kyanka, is that since PayPal has no link with the Red Cross, all donation money sent to the account would be given to the United Way isntead .
Revised:  The reason for this, according to Kyanka, is that since PayPal has no link with the Red Cross, all donation money sent to the account would be given to the United Way instead .
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Original:  The reason for this, according to Kyanka, is that since PayPal has no link with the Red Cross , all donation money sent to the account would be given to the United Wayinstead .
Revised:  The reason for this, according to Kyanka, is that since PayPal has no link with the Red Cross .
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Original:   While initially accepting PayPal's offer, Kyanka reconsidered when Something Awful readers objected to having their donation money sent to the United Way - partly due to the organizations troubled past.
Revised:  While initially accepting offer, Kyanka reconsidered when Something Awful readers objected to having their donation money sent to the United Way - partly due to the organizations troubled past.
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Original:   While initially accepting PayPal's offer, Kyanka reconsidered when Something Awful readers objected to having their donation money sent to the United Way - partly due to the organizations troubled past.
Revised:  While initially accepting PayPal's offer, Kyanka reconsidered when Something Awful readers objected to having their donation sent to the United Way - partly due to the organizations troubled past.
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Original:   While initially accepting PayPal's offer, Kyanka reconsidered when Something Awful readers objected to having their donation money sent to the United Way - partly due to the organizations troubled past.
Revised:  While initially accepting PayPal's offer, Kyanka reconsidered when Something Awful readers objected to having their donation money sent to the United Way — partly due to the organizations troubled past.
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Original:  The hurricane is currently growing stronger in the warmer water in the open Atlantic Ocean.
Revised:  The hurricane is currently growing stronger in warm waters in the open Atlantic Ocean.
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Original:  According to MSNBC News, at 5 a.m. EDT the hurricane had a maximum sustained wind of 75 mph. which allowed it to just make it to hurricane status and was centered at 256 miles Southeast of Bermuda.
Revised:  According to MSNBC News, at 5 a.m. EDT the hurricane had a maximum sustained wind of 75 mph. , which barely makes it to hurricane status, and was centered at 256 miles Southeast of Bermuda.
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Original:  If the hurricane continues on its route as was planned , hurricane specialist Stacy Stewart believes, "Maria should remain well to the east of Bermuda and only pose a threat to shipping interests.”
Revised:  If the hurricane continues on its route as was predicted , hurricane specialist Stacy Stewart believes, "Maria should remain well to the east of Bermuda and only pose a threat to shipping interests.”
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Original:  This hurricane doesn't seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster,  Katrina, since it plainly just is not quite as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler  waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point.
Revised:  This hurricane does not seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Katrina, since it plainly just is not quite as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point.
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Original:  This hurricane doesn't seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster,  Katrina, since it plainly just is not quite as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler  waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point.
Revised:  This hurricane doesn't seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Katrina, since it plainly is not as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point.
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Original:  This hurricane doesn't seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster,  Katrina, since it plainly just is not quite as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler  waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point.
Revised:  This hurricane doesn't seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Katrina, since it plainly just is not quite as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler Atlantic waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point.
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Original:  Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane season this year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center - only about 4 or 5 named storms as of this time of year , keping in mind the season is from June 1 to Nov. 30
Revised:  Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane season this year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center — only about 4 or 5 named storms as of this time of year , keping in mind the season is from June 1 to Nov. 30
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Original:  Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane season this year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center - only about 4 or 5 named storms as of this time of year , keping in mind the season is from June 1 to Nov. 30
Revised:  Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane season this year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center - only about 4 or 5 named storms as of this time of year — keeping in mind the season is from June 1 to Nov. 30
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Original:  Currently it is moving North-northwest and has been predicted to turn Northward around late Sunday and early Monday.
Revised:  Currently it is moving north-northwest and has been predicted to turn Northward around late Sunday and early Monday.
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Original:  Currently it is moving North-northwest and has been predicted to turn Northward around late Sunday and early Monday.
Revised:  Currently it is moving North-northwest and has been predicted to turn northward around late Sunday and early Monday.
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Original:  This hurricane does not seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Hurricane Katrina, since it plainly is not as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler Atlantic waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point . Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane seasonthis year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center —
Revised:  This hurricane does not appear to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Hurricane Katrina, since it plainly is not as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler Atlantic waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point . Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane seasonthis year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center —
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Original:  This hurricane does not seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Hurricane Katrina, since it plainly is not as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler Atlantic waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point . Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane seasonthis year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center —
Revised:  This hurricane does not seem to pose a threat comparable to the current major US disaster, Hurricane Katrina, since it plainly is not as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler Atlantic waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point . Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane seasonthis year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center —
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Original:  This hurricane does not seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Hurricane Katrina, since it plainly is not as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler Atlantic waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point . Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane seasonthis year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center —
Revised:  This hurricane does not seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Hurricane Katrina, since it plainly is not as powerful and is expected to soon move into cooler Atlantic waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point . Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane seasonthis year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center —
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Original:  This hurricane does not seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Hurricane Katrina, since it plainly is not as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler Atlantic waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength at that point . Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane seasonthis year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center —
Revised:  This hurricane does not seem to pose a threat to mount to anything comparable to the current major US disaster, Hurricane Katrina, since it plainly is not as powerful and is expected to soon land in cooler Atlantic waters, sapping much of it's remaining strength . Maria is the 13th named storm of the hurricane seasonthis year, which is distantly surpassing a statistic from the hurricane center —
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Original:  only about 4 or 5 named storms as of this time of year — keeping in mind the season is from June 1 to Nov. 30
Revised:  only about 4 or 5 named storms as of this time of year — keeping in mind the season runs from June 1 to Nov. 30
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Original:  only about 4 or 5 named storms as of this time of year — keeping in mind the season is from June 1 to Nov. 30
Revised:  only about 4 or 5 named storms as of this time of year — keeping in mind the season is from June 1 to November 30
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Original: Hurricane Maria has intensified and become the season's fifth hurricane on Sunday, Sept. 4.
Revised: Tropical storm Maria intensified and became the season's fifth hurricane on Sunday, Sept. 4.
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Original: Tropical storm Maria intensified and became the season's fifth hurricane on Sunday, Sept. 4.
Revised: Tropical storm Maria intensified and became the season's fifth hurricane on Sunday, September 4.
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Original:  The hurricane is currently growing stronger in warm waters in the open Atlantic Ocean.
Revised:  The hurricane is currently growing stronger in the warm waters of the open Atlantic Ocean.
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Original:  If the hurricane continues on its route as was predicted, hurricane specialist Stacy Stewart believes, "Maria should remain well to the east of Bermuda and only pose a threat to shipping interests.”
Revised:  If the hurricane continues on its route as predicted, hurricane specialist Stacy Stewart believes, "Maria should remain well to the east of Bermuda and only pose a threat to shipping interests.”
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Original: The man 's wife was spotted leaving  Val-de-Grace military hospital in Southern Paris, the same hospital Chirac is currently in, but refused speaking to any reporters.
Revised: Chirac 's wife was spotted leaving Val-de-Grace military hospital in Southern Paris, the same hospital Chirac is currently in, but refused speaking to any reporters.
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Original: The man 's wife was spotted leaving  Val-de-Grace military hospital in Southern Paris, the same hospital Chirac is currently in, but refused speaking to any reporters.
Revised: The man 's wife was spotted leaving the Val-de-Grace military hospital in Southern Paris, the same hospital Chirac is currently in, but refused speaking to any reporters.
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Original: The man 's wife was spotted leaving  Val-de-Grace military hospital in Southern Paris, the same hospital Chirac is currently in, but refused speaking to any reporters.
Revised: The man 's wife was spotted leaving Val-de-Grace military hospital in Southern Paris, the same hospital Chirac is currently in, but she refused to speak with reporters.
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Original:   The head of Chirac 's political party claims that nobody would stop  his quest for the presidency in two years time .
Revised:  The head of the President 's political party claims that nobody would stop his quest for the presidency in two years time .
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Original:   The head of Chirac 's political party claims that nobody would stop  his quest for the presidency in two years time .
Revised:  The head of Chirac 's political party claims that nobody would stop Chirac in his quest for the presidency in two years time .
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Original:   The head of Chirac 's political party claims that nobody would stop  his quest for the presidency in two years time .
Revised:  The head of Chirac 's political party claims that nobody would stop his quest for the presidency two years from now .
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Original:  Chirac's wife was spotted leaving the Val-de-Grace military hospital in Southern Paris, the same hospital Chirac is currently in , but she refused to speak with reporters.
Revised:  Chirac's wife was spotted leaving the Val-de-Grace hospital in Southern Paris, the same hospital Chirac is currently in , but she refused to speak with reporters.
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