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Original: An Asiana Airlines airbus made an emergency landing Friday night and landed safely without its nose, radar and windows.
Revised: An Asiana Airlines Airbus aircraft made an emergency landing Friday night and landed safely without its nose, radar and windows.
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Original:  The plane lost parts in a severe storm between the island Cheju and the Korea South-Korean capital Seoul.
Revised:  The plane lost parts in a severe storm between Cheju island and Seoul.
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Original:  Hail also destroyed the windows in the cockpit , which were made of security glass.
Revised:  Hail also destroyed the plane's cockpit windows which were made of security glass.
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Original:  The windows remained in place but the pilots were unable to watch through the glass.
Revised:  The windows remained in place but the pilots were unable to see through the glass.
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Original: A double-decker ferry capsized late Monday in the near  .
Revised: A double-decker ferry capsized late Monday in the near , .
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Original: “We cannot give any figure of death, but the boat was carrying around 250 people,” said Pradip Saloi, police superintendent of the district .
Revised: No life jackets or lifeboats were aboard the ferry .
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Original:  The river provides irrigation and transportation to the people along it's coast.
Revised:  The river is a vital source of irrigation and transportation to the people along it's coast.
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Original:  It is approximately 1,800 miles long .
Revised:  It is approximately 1,800 miles long , making rescue efforts difficult to pursue quickly. Rescuers are working around the clock in efforts to locate any remaining survivors.
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Original:  Indian Prime Minister issued a statement expressing his remorse over the death of the passengers and announced that he would compensate the next of kin of all casualties Rs 200,000, or about $4,000 US dollars
Revised:  Indian Prime Minister issued a statement expressing his remorse over the death of the passengers and announcing that he would compensate the next of kin of all casualties Rs 200,000, or about $4,000 US dollars
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Original:  No life jackets or lifeboats were aboard the ferry  .
Revised:  No life jackets or lifeboats were aboard the ferry at the time of the event .
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Original:  About 150 passengers were able to swim to shore.
Revised:  About 150 passengers swam to a nearby shore.
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Original:  The remaining passengers are missing and  feared dead.
Revised:  The remaining passengers are missing and are feared dead.
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Original:  This is one of the worst ferry accidents  recorded in India.
Revised:  Reports indicate this is one of the worst ferry accidents recorded in India.
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Original:  This is one of the worst ferry accidents  recorded in India.
Revised:  This is one of the worst ferry accidents ever recorded in India.
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Original:  The river is a vital source of irrigation and transportation to the people along it's coast.
Revised:  The river is a vital source of irrigation and transportation to the people along its coast.
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Original:  McAlister landed two penalty goals for the All Blacks to put them back in the game, with around 20 minutes rermaining .
Revised:  McAlister landed two penalty goals for the All Blacks to put them back in the game, with around 20 minutes remaining .
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Original: The All Blacks have defeated Ireland 34 points to 23 in rugby union at Waikato Stadium in New Zealand.
Revised: The All Blacks defeated Ireland 34 points to 23 in rugby union at Waikato Stadium in New Zealand.
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Original:  Scoring quickly opened up for the home side, with Doug Howlett getting a try in the first minuet of the game.
Revised:  Scoring quickly opened for the home side, with Doug Howlett getting a try in the first minuet of the game.
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Original:  Scoring quickly opened up for the home side, with Doug Howlett getting a try in the first minuet of the game.
Revised:  Scoring quickly opened up for the home side, with Doug Howlett getting a try in the first minute of the game.
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Original:  Ireland responded with a try to Andrew Trimble which was also subsequently converted.
Revised:  Ireland responded with a try to Andrew Trimble that was also subsequently converted.
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Original:  McAlister landed two penalty goals for the All Blacks to put them back in the game, with around 20 minutes remaining.
Revised:  McAlister landed two penalty goals for the All Blacks to put the team back in the game, with around 20 minutes remaining.
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Original:  A try to Troy Flavell ensured the All Blacks kept their record against Ireland intact.
Revised:  A try to Troy Flavell ensured the All Blacks kept its record against Ireland intact.
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Original: Swedish England manager Sven-Göran Eriksson's side had more possession but failed to score more than the one early goal.
Revised: England's Swedish manager Sven-Göran Eriksson's side had more possession but failed to score more than the one early goal.
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Original:  Swung in from the left of the field, the ball clipped the head of Paraguayan captain Carlos Gamara on its way to the net.
Revised:  Swung in from the left of the field, the ball clipped the head of Paraguayan captain Carlos Gamarra on its way to the net.
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Original:  Already, this is the first T.D. of the 2006 Atlantic Hurricane Season.
Revised:  This is the first T.D. of the 2006 Atlantic Hurricane Season.
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Original:  Grand Cayman picked up a whopping 22.7 inches of rain in the last 24 hours.
Revised:  Grand Cayman picked up 22.7 inches of rain in the last 24 hours.
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Original:  From Sunday into Tuesday, the heavy rain will hit Florida and could become a good drought buster for much of the state.
Revised:  From Sunday into Tuesday, the heavy rain will hit Florida and could become a good source of drought relief for much of the state.
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Original: Near the western tip of Cuba, a poorly organized Tropical Depression has formed with all the  thundershowers and torrential rain  east of the center.
Revised: Near the western tip of Cuba, a poorly organized Tropical Depression has formed with all the The thundershowers and torrential rain east of the center.
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Original:  Over the weekend if persistent convection develops closer to the center of circulation, the tropical depression could become Tropical Storm Alberto.
Revised:  However; over the weekend, if persistent convection develops closer to the center of circulation, the tropical depression could become Tropical Storm Alberto.
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Original: 190px Near the western tip of Cuba, a poorly organized Tropical Depression has formed, the first of the 2006 tropical storm season in the :w: Atlantic Ocean.
Revised: 190px Near the western tip of Cuba, a poorly organized Tropical Depression has formed, the first of the 2006 tropical storm season in the Atlantic Ocean.
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Original:  However ; over the weekend, if persistent convection develops closer to the center of circulation, the tropical depression could become Tropical Storm Alberto.
Revised:  However , over the weekend, if persistent convection develops closer to the center of circulation, the tropical depression could become Tropical Storm Alberto.
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Original: The Springboks have defeated Scotland in a rugby test in Durban, South Africa.
Revised: The Springboks defeated Scotland in a rugby test in Durban, South Africa.
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Original:  The Springboks were out to defend their unbeaten home recodr under Jake White, whilst the Scottish were coming in off good form in the Six Nations.
Revised:  The Springboks intended to defend its unbeaten home record under Jake White, whilst the Scottish were coming in off good form in the Six Nations.
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Original:  The Springboks were out to defend their unbeaten home recodr under Jake White, whilst the Scottish were coming in off good form in the Six Nations.
Revised:  The Springboks were out to defend their unbeaten home recodr under Jake White, whilst the Scottish showed good form in the Six Nations.
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Original:  Scoring opened up in the third minute, with Percy Montgomery landing a penalty goal to put South Africa three points in front.
Revised:  Scoring opened in the third minute, with Percy Montgomery landing a penalty goal to put South Africa three points in front.
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Original:  Scotland replied five minutes later with a penalty goal of their own by Chris Paterson to tie up the game at three points all.
Revised:  Scotland replied five minutes later with a penalty goal of its own by Chris Paterson to tie up the game at three points all.
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Original:  Scotland replied five minutes later with a penalty goal of their own by Chris Paterson to tie up the game at three points all.
Revised:  Scotland replied five minutes later with a penalty goal of their own by Chris Paterson to tie the game at three points all.
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Original:  In the 15th minute, the Springboks were disallowed a try after the referee consulted the television match official.
Revised:  In the 15th minute, the Springboks team was disallowed a try after the referee consulted the television match official.
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Original:  A minute later Breyton Paulse touches down in the corner for another South African try, though it is not converted, Scotland are now trailing three points to 15.
Revised:  A minute later Breyton Paulse touches down in the corner for another South African try, though it is not converted, Scotland now trails three points to 15.
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Original:  Montgomery converted the try, and South Africa were now leading 25 to nine.
Revised:  Montgomery converted the try, and South Africa was now leading 25 to nine.
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Original:  This lead was taken to 28 points when South African were successful with another penalty goal in the 61st minute.
Revised:  South African took the lead to 28 points when South African were successful with another penalty goal in the 61st minute.
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Original:  This lead was taken to 28 points when South African were successful with another penalty goal in the 61st minute.
Revised:  This lead was taken to 28 points with another penalty goal in the 61st minute.
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Original:  The nations will be meeting again next week
Revised:  The nations will meet again next week
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Original: Jonathan Moore, a redshirt freshman, became the eigth individual national championship for Oklahoma State, the first since Charles Howell III in 2000.
Revised: Jonathan Moore, a redshirt freshman, became the eighth individual national championship for Oklahoma State, the first since Charles Howell III in 2000.
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Original:  The 77-year-old separatist has been arrested and jailed on several occasions for making statements urging people to support Kashmir's accession to Pakistan . Category:Asia category:India Category:Jammu and Kashmir Category:Politics and conflic
Revised:  The 77-year-old separatist has been arrested and jailed on several occasions for making statements urging people to support Kashmir's accession to Pakistan Category:Asia category:India Category:Jammu and Kashmir Category:Politics and conflic
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Original:  The 77-year-old separatist has been arrested and jailed on several occasions for making statements urging people to support Kashmir's accession to Pakistan . Category:Asia category:India Category:Jammu and Kashmir Category:Politics and conflic
Revised:  The 77-year-old separatist has been arrested and jailed on several occasions for making statements urging people to support Kashmir's accession to Pakistan . 
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Original: Activists of the Shiv sena today disrupted a news conference of Syed Ali Shah Geelani, the leader of the breakaway fraction of the All Party Hurriyat Conference (APHC) Kashmir's largest separatist alliance.
Revised: Activists of the Shiv Sena today disrupted a news conference of Syed Ali Shah Geelani, the leader of the breakaway fraction of the All Party Hurriyat Conference (APHC) Kashmir's largest separatist alliance.
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Original:  It is a Harvard Square historic landmar
Revised:  It is a Harvard Square historic landmark
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Original: The Grolier Poetry Bookstore in Cambridge, Massachusetts, has a new owner, Nigerian Poet and Wellesley Colleg Philosophy Professor Ifeanyi Menkiti.
Revised: The Grolier Poetry Bookstore in Cambridge, Massachusetts, has a new owner, Nigerian Poet and Wellesley College Philosophy Professor Ifeanyi Menkiti.
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Original:  Publisher's Weekly and the Boston Globe have both reported that he plans to maintain the readings and other events that the store has long been famous for, and to expand the selection of international writers and maintain more regular hours.
Revised:  Publisher's Weekly and the Boston Globe have reported that he plans to maintain the readings and other events that the store has long been famous for, and to expand the selection of international writers and maintain more regular hours.
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Original:  Publisher's Weekly and the Boston Globe have both reported that he plans to maintain the readings and other events that the store has long been famous for, and to expand the selection of international writers and maintain more regular hours.
Revised:  Publisher's Weekly and the Boston Globe have both reported that he plans to maintain the readings and other events that the store has long been famous for, expand the selection of international writers and maintain more regular hours.
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Original: The Grolier Poetry Bookstore in Cambridge, Massachusetts, has a new owner, Nigerian Poet and Wellesley College Philosophy Professor Ifeanyi Menkiti.
Revised: The Grolier Poetry Bookshop in Cambridge, Massachusetts, has a new owner, Nigerian Poet and Wellesley College Philosophy Professor Ifeanyi Menkiti.
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Original:  Police found no such device so far .
Revised:  Police found no such device .
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Original:  Chances of an own through attacking play were few but a shot from substitute Cornell Glen clipped the crossbar  . Sweden had many chances for a strike force and must feel unfortunate that none were converted.
Revised:  Chances through their own attacking play were few but a shot from substitute Cornell Glen clipped the crossbar . Sweden had many chances for a strike force and must feel unfortunate that none were converted.
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Original:  Chances of an own through attacking play were few but a shot from substitute Cornell Glen clipped the crossbar  . Sweden had many chances for a strike force and must feel unfortunate that none were converted.
Revised:  Chances of an own through attacking play were few but a shot from substitute Cornell Glen clipped the crossbar . Sweden had many chances for their strikeforce and must feel unfortunate that none were converted.
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Original:  Rami Shaaban in the Sweden goal didn't have a save to make and a statistic that says much for the dominance of the Swedish yellow jerseys is that Sweden had eight corner kicks to Trinidad and Tobago's one.
Revised:  Rami Shaaban in the Sweden goal didn't have a save to make . A statistic that says much for the dominance of the Swedish yellow jerseys is that Sweden had eight corner kicks to Trinidad and Tobago's one.
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Original:  Chances through their own attacking play were fewbut a shot from substitute Cornell Glen clipped the crossbar to the glee of their traveling supporters.
Revised:  They had few chances on goal because their attacking plays were few; but one shot from substitute Cornell Glen clipped the crossbar to the glee of their traveling supporters.
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Original:  Chances through their own attacking play were fewbut a shot from substitute Cornell Glen clipped the crossbar to the glee of their traveling supporters.
Revised:  Chances through their own attacking play were fewbut a shot from substitute Cornell Glen clipped the crossbar to the glee of supporters.
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Original:  Sweden had many chances for their strikeforce and must feel unfortunate  that none were converted.
Revised:  Sweden made many goalscoring chances but their strikers must feel unfortunate that none were converted.
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Original:  Sweden had many chances for their strikeforce and must feel unfortunate  that none were converted.
Revised:  Sweden had many chances for their strikeforce and must feel unfortunate for that none were converted.
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Original:  Rami Shaaban in the Sweden goal didn't have a save to make.
Revised:  Rami Shaaban in the Sweden goal did not have a save to make.
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Original: The so-callled Soca Warriors started the game with a reserve goalkeeper after first choice Kelvin Jack was injured after warming up.
Revised: Trinidad and Tobago started the game with a reserve goalkeeper after first choice Kelvin Jack was injured after warming up.
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Original:  The sending off of Avery John, after getting booked for a second time for a lunge, this time on Fredrick Larson on 46 minutes, did not stop them .
Revised:  The sending off of Avery John, after getting booked for a second time for a lunge, this time on Fredrick Larson on 46 minutes, did not stop the Soca Warriors .
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Original:  But Shaka Hislop produced a string of outstanding saves, including one 11 minutes from time when he stuck out a hand to stop Marcus Allback placing the ball over him.
Revised:  But Shaka Hislop produced a string of outstanding saves, which included one 11 minutes from time when he stuck out a hand to stop Marcus Allback placing the ball over him.
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Original:  No goal was given and in the end it did not effect the result of the game for Argentina.
Revised:  No goal was given and in the end it did not change the result of the game for Argentina.
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Original: As the excitment was reaching a climax, on 82 minutes the pressure of the team two goals down paid when a great attacking period ended with Didier Drogba scoring.
Revised: As the excitment reached a climax, on 82 minutes the pressure of the team two goals down paid when a great attacking period ended with Didier Drogba scoring.
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Original: As the excitment was reaching a climax, on 82 minutes the pressure of the team two goals down paid when a great attacking period ended with Didier Drogba scoring.
Revised: As the excitment was reaching a climax, on 82 minutes the pressure of the team two goals down paid when a great attack ended with Didier Drogba scoring.
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Original:  When an in-swinging freekick delivered by Juan Riquelme was knocked-down  Hernan Crespo pounced on the loose ball inside the 6 yard box to score for Argentina on 25 minutes.
Revised:  When an in-swinging freekick delivered by Juan Riquelme was knocked-down Hernan Crespo pounced on the loose ball inside the 6 yard box to score on 25 minutes.
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Original: As the excitment reached a climax, on 82 minutes the pressure of the team two goals down paid when a great attack ended with Didier Drogba scoring .
Revised: As the excitment reached a climax, on 82 minutes the pressure of the team two goals down paid when a great attack ended with a Didier Drogba score .
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Original:  The Argentines had opened the scoring when an in-swinging freekick delivered by Juan Riquelme was knocked-down in front of goal.
Revised:  The Argentines had scored first when an in-swinging freekick delivered by Juan Riquelme was knocked-down in front of goal.
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Original:  Hernan Crespo pounced on the loose ball inside the 6 yard box to score on 25 minutes.
Revised:  Hernan Crespo pounced on the loose ball inside the six yard box to score on 25 minutes.
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Original: As the excitment reached a climax, on 82 minutes the pressure of the team two goals down paid when a great attack ended with a Didier Drogba score.
Revised: As the excitement reached a climax, on 82 minutes the pressure of the team two goals down paid when a great attack ended with a Didier Drogba score.
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Original:  Referee: Frank De Bleeckere ( Belguim )10px 10px
Revised:  Referee: Frank De Bleeckere ( Belgium )10px 10px
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Original:  Insurgents say the beheadings are in retaliation for the kiling of Sunnis.
Revised:  Insurgents say the beheadings are in retaliation for the killing of Sunnis.
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Original: A new video posted on the Internet by Iraqi insurgents , allegedly shows the beheading of three Shiite death squad members .
Revised: A new video posted on the Internet by Iraqi insurgents shows the beheading of three Shiite death squad members .
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Original: A new video posted on the Internet by Iraqi insurgents , allegedly shows the beheading of three Shiite death squad members .
Revised: A new video posted on the Internet by Iraqi insurgents , allegedly shows the beheading of three men, whom the killers allege are members of a death suqad .
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Original:  The members of the squad then identify themselves as being part of the squad and are then beheaded.
Revised:  The members of the squad then identify themselves as being part of a death squad and are then beheaded.
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Original:  It is not known when the video was made and the names of the soldiers are not known
Revised:  It is not known when the video was made and the victms have not been identified
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Original:  The group, Ansar al-Sunnah  posted the video and claims responsibility .
Revised:  The group, Ansar al-Sunnah has posted the video and claims responsibility .
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Original:  The group, Ansar al-Sunnah  posted the video and claims responsibility .
Revised:  The group, Ansar al-Sunnah posted the video and claimed responsibility for the killings .
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Original: A new video posted on the Internet by Iraqi insurgents shows the beheading of three men, whom the killers allege are members of a death squad.
Revised: A new video posted on the internet by Iraqi insurgents shows the beheading of three men, whom the killers allege are members of a death squad.
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Original: Biarritz have defeated Stade Toulousian to win the 2005-06 Top 14.
Revised: Biarritz have defeated Stade Toulousain to win the 2005-06 Top 14.
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Original:  The final was played at Stade de France on Saturday   
Revised:  The final was played at Stade de France on Saturday . 
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Original: Kim Beazley leader  of the Australian opposition has promised to scrap workplace agreements introduced as part of the Howard government's controversial Workchoices industrial relations reforms.
Revised: Kim Beazley leader Kim Beazley leader of the Australian opposition has promised to scrap workplace agreements introduced as part of the Howard government's controversial Workchoices industrial relations reforms.
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Original:  The announcement comes as the Australian Council of Trade Unions (ACTU) launches its multi-million dollar advertisment campaign against the government's changes.
Revised:  The announcement comes as the Australian Council of Trade Unions (ACTU) launches its multi-million dollar advertisement campaign against the government's changes.
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Original:   England coach Andy Robinson slammed the condition of the pitch of Telstra Stadium.
Revised:  In the lead up to the game, England coach Andy Robinson slammed the condition of the pitch of Telstra Stadium.
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