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Original:  Officials express misgivings on Iraq Sen. Roberts%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Rockefellor on pre-war intelligence List of documents A progressive blog, Democrats.com, is offering a $1,000 reward to anyone who can get United States president George W. Bush to answer a question about pre-Iraq war intelligence.
Revised:  Officials express misgivings on Iraq Sen. Roberts%DIFDELCMD < & %%% A progressive blog, Democrats.com, is offering a $1,000 reward to anyone who can get United States president George W. Bush to answer a question about pre-Iraq war intelligence.
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Original: Since Google Android was frequently discussed in the 2008 Google Developer Day, and the conceptual structure of GPhone was ever announced last year, mobile phone manufacturers including Motorola, HTC, and Samsung were highly interested in manufacturing GPhone.
Revised: Ever since Google Android was frequently discussed in the 2008 Google Developer Day, and the conceptual structure of GPhone was ever announced last year, mobile phone manufacturers including Motorola, HTC, and Samsung were highly interested in manufacturing GPhone.
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Original: Since Google Android was frequently discussed in the 2008 Google Developer Day, and the conceptual structure of GPhone was ever announced last year, mobile phone manufacturers including Motorola, HTC, and Samsung were highly interested in manufacturing GPhone.
Revised: Since Google Android was frequently discussed in the 2008 Google Developer Day, and the conceptual structure of GPhone was announced last year, mobile phone manufacturers including Motorola, HTC, and Samsung were highly interested in manufacturing GPhone.
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Original: Since Google Android was frequently discussed in the 2008 Google Developer Day, and the conceptual structure of GPhone was ever announced last year, mobile phone manufacturers including Motorola, HTC, and Samsung were highly interested in manufacturing GPhone.
Revised: Since Google Android was frequently discussed in the 2008 Google Developer Day, and the conceptual structure of GPhone was ever announced last year, mobile phone manufacturers including Motorola, HTC, and Samsung have been highly interested in manufacturing GPhone.
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Original:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone  will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
Revised:  The "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
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Original:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone  will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
Revised:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, which has had several issues with multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
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Original:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone  will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
Revised:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformation and localization in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
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Original:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone  will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
Revised:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries . It was confirmed to thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
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Original:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone  will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
Revised:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers that the GPhone will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
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Original:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone  will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
Revised:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone 's launch will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
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Original:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone  will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
Revised:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone will be postponed to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
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Original:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone  will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stably of Android .
Revised:  Although the "GPhone" will be built with "Android" inside, with several issues on multi-language transformations and localizations in different countries , thirty-three manufacturers were confirmed that the GPhone will be postponed its launch to 2008 Q4 or 2009 Q1 after the stability of Android is greater .
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Original:  Although the postponement was confirmed, but some industrial analysts commented that GPhone will be the greatest opponent for iPhone after its launch
Revised:  Although the postponement was confirmed, some industrial analysts commented that GPhone will be the greatest opponent for iPhone after its launch
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Original: A manhunt is underway for John Walsh, a father of a police officer in his late 60s  .
Revised: The manhunt for John Walsh, a father of a police officer in his late 60s .
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Original:  He is thought to be heading to Newcastle, New South Wales or Canberra, Australian Capital Territory and is believed to be driving in a silver Toyota Avalon with the New South Wales number plate YWS 616.
Revised:  He is thought to be heading to Newcastle, New South Wales or Canberra, Australian Capital Territory and was believed to be driving in a silver Toyota Avalon with the New South Wales number plate YWS 616.
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Original: The manhunt for John Walsh, a father of a police officer in his late 60s has ended without further incident at a motel on the Mid Western Highway near Hay, New South Wales in Western NSW with a Toyota sedan which he was thought to be driving was also seized for examination by forensics.
Revised: The manhunt for John Walsh, a father of a police officer in his late 60s has ended without further incident at a motel on the Mid-Western Highway near Hay, New South Wales in Western NSW with a Toyota sedan which he was thought to be driving was also seized for examination by forensics.
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Original: The manhunt for John Walsh, a father of a police officer in his late 60s has ended without further incident at a motel on the Mid-Western Highway near Hay, New South Wales in Western NSW with a Toyota sedan which he was thought to be driving was also seized for examination by forensics.
Revised: The manhunt for John Walsh, a father of a police officer in his late 60s has ended without further incident at a motel on the Mid-Western Highway near Hay, New South Wales in Western NSW . The Toyota sedan which he was thought to be driving was also seized for examination by forensics.
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Original: The manhunt for John Walsh, a father of a police officer in his late 60s  has ended without further incident at a motel on the Mid-Western Highway near Hay, New South Wales in Western NSW. The Toyota sedan which he was thought to be driving was found in the motel carpark and has been seized for examination by forensics.
Revised: The manhunt for John Walsh, a father of a police officer in his late 60s , has ended without further incident at a motel on the Mid-Western Highway near Hay, New South Wales in Western NSW. The Toyota sedan which he was thought to be driving was found in the motel carpark and has been seized for examination by forensics.
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Original:  The man who is the police officer's father is reported to be on the run, and is wanted by New South Wales Police . NSW Police originally thought he was to be heading to Newcastle, New South Wales or Canberra, Australian Capital Territory and was believed to be driving in a silver Toyota Avalon
Revised:  New South Wales Police . NSW Police originally thought he was to be heading to Newcastle, New South Wales or Canberra, Australian Capital Territory and was believed to be driving in a silver Toyota Avalon
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Original:  The man who is the police officer's father is reported to be on the run, and is wanted by New South Wales Police . NSW Police originally thought he was to be heading to Newcastle, New South Wales or Canberra, Australian Capital Territory and was believed to be driving in a silver Toyota Avalon
Revised:  The man who is the police officer's father is reported to be on the run, and is wanted by New South Wales Police originally thought he was to be heading to Newcastle, New South Wales or Canberra, Australian Capital Territory and was believed to be driving in a silver Toyota Avalon
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The man who is the police officer's father is reported to be on the run, and is wanted by New South Wales Police . NSW Police originally thought he was to be heading to Newcastle, New South Wales or Canberra, Australian Capital Territory and was believed to be driving in a silver Toyota Avalon
Revised:  The man who is the police officer's father is reported to be on the run, and is wanted by New South Wales Police . NSW Police originally thought he was heading to Newcastle, New South Wales or Canberra, Australian Capital Territory and was believed to be driving in a silver Toyota Avalon
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Original:  ]  Robert Mugabe was recently under a large amount of pressure to postpone the election after the main opposition candidate, Morgan Tsvangirai, pulled out due to fears of violence.
Revised: Odinga continued, " ] Robert Mugabe was recently under a large amount of pressure to postpone the election after the main opposition candidate, Morgan Tsvangirai, pulled out due to fears of violence.
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Original:  ]  Robert Mugabe was recently under a large amount of pressure to postpone the election after the main opposition candidate, Morgan Tsvangirai, pulled out due to fears of violence.
Revised:  The] Robert Mugabe was recently under a large amount of pressure to postpone the election after the main opposition candidate, Morgan Tsvangirai, pulled out due to fears of violence.
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Original:  He said that he "strongly supports the statement of the Chairman of SADC (Southern African Development Community) that conditions do not exist for a run-off election to be held at this time and that they should be postponed.  
Revised:  He said that he "strongly supports the statement of the Chairman of SADC (Southern African Development Community) that conditions do not exist for a run-off election to be held at this time and that they should be postponed. " 
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Original:  For example, Ban Ki-moon, secretary general of the United Nations  yesterday called for the election to be postponed.
Revised:  For example, Ban Ki-moon, secretary general of the United Nations , yesterday called for the election to be postponed.
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Original:  "The returns show that we are winning convincingly, that we have won in all the 26 constituencies in Harare, an MDC stronghold where we won in only one constituency in March.     
Revised:  "The returns show that we are winning convincingly, that we have won in all the 26 constituencies in Harare, an MDC stronghold where we won in only one constituency in March. " 
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Original:  The plane is reported to have caught fire and exploded after the crash at 8:00 am  
Revised:  The plane is reported to have caught fire and exploded after the crash at 8:00 am . 
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Original:  It took two hours to extuiguish the fire on board the Airborne Express aircraft, which was parked at a mail proscessing area of San Francisco International Airport   
Revised:  It took two hours to extuiguish the fire on board the Airborne Express aircraft, which was parked at a mail proscessing area of San Francisco International Airport . 
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Original:  The fire was described as intense and producing thick amounts of black smoke  
Revised:  The fire was described as intense and producing thick amounts of black smoke An investigation into the cause is underway. It is unclear if there was cargo on board at the time
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Original:  It took two hours to extuiguish the fire on board the Airborne Express aircraft, which was parked at a mail proscessing area of San Francisco International Airport  .
Revised:  It took two hours to extuiguish the fire on board the Airborne Express aircraft, which was parked at a mail proscessing area of San Francisco International Airport in California, United States .
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Original:  It took two hours to extuiguish the fire on board the Airborne Express aircraft, which was parked at a mail proscessing area of San Francisco International Airport in California, United States.
Revised:  It took two hours to extinguish the fire on board the Airborne Express aircraft, which was parked at a mail proscessing area of San Francisco International Airport in California, United States.
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Original:  It took two hours to extuiguish the fire on board the Airborne Express aircraft, which was parked at a mail proscessing area of San Francisco International Airport in California, United States.
Revised:  It took two hours to extuiguish the fire on board the Airborne Express aircraft, which was parked at a mail processing area of San Francisco International Airport in California, United States.
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Original:  Roads around the airport were closed for ten minutes while crews responded, and 100 people were evacuate from a nearby building.
Revised:  Roads around the airport were closed for ten minutes while crews responded, and 100 people were evacuated from a nearby building.
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Original:  Airport Duty Manager Lilly Wang said of the damage  "You can actually see through the top of the aircraft.
Revised:  Airport Duty Manager Lilly Wang said of the damage , "You can actually see through the top of the aircraft.
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Original: Abkhazia, a region located within the internationally recognised borders of Georgia  which is a de facto independent republic without international recognition, has closed its border with the country following recent bomb blasts.
Revised: Abkhazia, a region located within the internationally recognised borders of Georgia , but which is a de facto independent republic without international recognition, has closed its border with the country following recent bomb blasts.
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Original:  The fate of a twetieth is unknown.
Revised:  The fate of a twentieth person is unknown.
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Original:  They were all labourers living inside the building, which is reported to have been in a seriously unstable condition for a month, with occupants refusing to comply with evacuation requests.
Revised:  The victims were all labourers living inside the building, which is reported to have been in a seriously unstable condition for a month, with occupants refusing to comply with evacuation requests.
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Original:  The early morning disaster in  Sa'adatabad district reduced the building to rubble in seconds.
Revised:  The early morning disaster in the Sa'adatabad district reduced the building to rubble in seconds.
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Original: A 13km section of road between Macclesfield and Buxton, known as the Cat and Fiddle Road, has been named as Britain ’ s most dangerous road.
Revised: A 13km section of road between Macclesfield and Buxton, known as the Cat and Fiddle Road, has been named as Britain ' s most dangerous road.
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Original:  Britain ’ s most improved road in this year ’ s analysis by the Road Safety Foundation is the A453 road from the A38 to Tamworth in Staffordshire.
Revised:  Britain ' s most improved road in this year ’ s analysis by the Road Safety Foundation is the A453 road from the A38 to Tamworth in Staffordshire.
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Original:  Britain ’ s most improved road in this year ’ s analysis by the Road Safety Foundation is the A453 road from the A38 to Tamworth in Staffordshire.
Revised:  Britain ’ s most improved road in this year ' s analysis by the Road Safety Foundation is the A453 road from the A38 to Tamworth in Staffordshire.
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Original:  In Scotland the most dangerous road was the 27km stretch of the w: A99 road between the A9 at Latheron and Wick.
Revised:  In Scotland the most dangerous road was the 27km stretch of the A99 road between the A9 at Latheron and Wick.
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Original:  NGerda 21:25, Jun 23, 2005 (            [[           UT
Revised:  NGerda 21:25, Jun 23, 2005 ( [[ There are two primary reasons I oppose the automation process under the current proposal: There is no way to create the initial article link using an automated process. Although it is possible to use the "manual entry" nested template, this creates two lists, and (assuming the process is integrated, and each file then gets the correct category applied) the resulting article will be listed in both. Which then requires going back and editing the manual list so the automated list will work by itself... In short, exactly the same number of edits as the current system. Plus the additional level of complexity. And the need for extra watchfulness to make sure newbies are following the process. And offending people who prefer to work manually. To accomodate manual entry there will be two lists. Because there must be a way to manually enter initial links, there will always be two lists. Two places for articles to be found. Multiple ways to initiate errors. A top list and a lower list. New potential vandalism exploits. More-deeply nested templates, where subtle vandalism will be more difficult to detect or revert. These are not my only objections to the proposed system, but I do not see how these can be overcome. - Amgine/talk 28 June 2005 06:52 (UTC) UT
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Original:  It'd be easier to do that via the publish template inclusion only. -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 06:56 (UTC) On this we are in complete agreement. - Amgine/talk 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 (          {{   }}  }}    }}  }}  }}                                    UT
Revised:  It'd be easier to do that via the publish template inclusion only. -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 06:56 (UTC) On this we are in complete agreement. - Amgine/talk 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 ( There's little point in doing this change half-heartedly - just using DPL on the Main page and not on Developing doesn't make life for editors much easier, as Developing still needed cleaning out. So let's do it properly. I expect lots of people will be caught out by this but 1. better to do it now and get it over with 2. more experienced editors can help out confused newbies until people get used to it. {{ }} }} }} }} }} UT
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Original:  It'd be easier to do that via the publish template inclusion only. -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 06:56 (UTC) On this we are in complete agreement. - Amgine/talk 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 (          {{   }}  }}    }}  }}  }}                                    UT
Revised:  It'd be easier to do that via the publish template inclusion only. -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 06:56 (UTC) On this we are in complete agreement. - Amgine/talk 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 ( Also, creating a new day page is more of an PITA. I think it's worth setting the day before's page up in advance so adding a new day is just as easy as it is now (ie just changing the dates on Latest news). {{ }} }} }} }} }} UT
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Original:  It'd be easier to do that via the publish template inclusion only. -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 06:56 (UTC) On this we are in complete agreement. - Amgine/talk 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 (          {{   }}  }}    }}  }}  }}                                    UT
Revised:  It'd be easier to do that via the publish template inclusion only. -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 06:56 (UTC) On this we are in complete agreement. - Amgine/talk 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 ( What it comes down to, I believe, is this: Which is easier for the newbie to use? Yes, it's going to be tougher for us to get used to as we're used to the old way, but is this one better for new users? I believe it is. Simply, check this diff for Wikinews:Writing an article (which if a newbie doesn't follow, they are never going to get anywhere anyway). Which version is easier? {{ }} }} }} }} }} UT
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