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Original: On the one hand, proponents such as Jeanne Dopbrak, a sports medicine physician at the University of Pittsburgh Medical Center, contend that "[a child athlete's] immature skeleton just isn't ready to handle the day-to-day stresses that will occur . "  and that the stresses imposed on only partly developed muscular/skeletal system by gymnastics are almost certain to cause damage that would persist into adulthood.
Revised: On the one hand, proponents such as Jeanne Dopbrak, a sports medicine physician at the University of Pittsburgh Medical Center, contend that "[a child athlete's] immature skeleton just isn't ready to handle the day-to-day stresses that will occur . " , and that the stresses imposed on only partly developed muscular/skeletal system by gymnastics are almost certain to cause damage that would persist into adulthood.
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Original:  Lesions, which are precursors to stress fractures, occur in 11 percent of young female gymnasts, compared to 2.3 percent of girls and women in general.
Revised:  Lesions, which are precursors to stress fractures, occur in 11 \% of young female gymnasts, compared to 2.3 percent of girls and women in general.
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Original:  Lesions, which are precursors to stress fractures, occur in 11 percent of young female gymnasts, compared to 2.3 percent of girls and women in general.
Revised:  Lesions, which are precursors to stress fractures, occur in 11 percent of young female gymnasts, compared to 2.3 \% of girls and women in general.
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Original:  “Psychologically, I think they worry less,” former Olympic medallist Nellie Kim told The New York Times  . Daniela Silivaş, in her interview, commented, "You should know that I competed better at the age of 13 than at 17.
Revised:  Olympic medallist Nellie Kim told The New York Times . Daniela Silivaş, in her interview, commented, "You should know that I competed better at the age of 13 than at 17.
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Original:  “Psychologically, I think they worry less,” former Olympic medallist Nellie Kim told The New York Times  . Daniela Silivaş, in her interview, commented, "You should know that I competed better at the age of 13 than at 17.
Revised:  “Psychologically, I think they worry less,” former Olympic medallist Nellie Kim told The New York Times that "Psychologically, I think they worry less" . Daniela Silivaş, in her interview, commented, "You should know that I competed better at the age of 13 than at 17.
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Original:  I felt much better, physical (sic) and mentally."
Revised:  I felt much better, physical and mentally."
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Original:  She competed in the 1989 World Championships at the estimated age of 11 or 12. "Gold Medalist and His Team May Be Barred From Olympic Games : Last Chance for a North Korean Athlete" Christopher Clarey, International Herald Times, Friday, April 19, 1996 However, she may have been younger than that.
Revised:  She competed in the 1989 World Championships at the estimated age of 11 or 12. However, she may have been younger than that.
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Original:  "Romanian gymnasts 'lied about age'" Associated Press, April 18, 2002 Olga Mostepanova (Soviet Union): Mostepanova, who competed at the 1983 and 1985 World Championships and was the all-around gold medalist at the 1984 Friendship Games, has been reported as having 1968 and 1969 birth dates, but has stated that she was actually born in 1970.
Revised:  Olga Mostepanova (Soviet Union): Mostepanova, who competed at the 1983 and 1985 World Championships and was the all-around gold medalist at the 1984 Friendship Games, has been reported as having 1968 and 1969 birth dates, but has stated that she was actually born in 1970.
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Original:  FIG: China should be stripped of Sydney bronze Associated Press, February 26, 2010.
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Original:  In April 2010, the International Olympic Committee upheld the F.I.G. 's recommendation and nullified both the Chinese team's bronze medal and Dong's individual Olympic placement.
Revised:  In April 2010, the International Olympic Committee upheld the FIG 's recommendation and nullified both the Chinese team's bronze medal and Dong's individual Olympic placement.
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Original:  Her 2010 F.I.G. license and 2010 Worlds registration indicated that she was born in 1989.
Revised:  Her 2010 FIG license and 2010 Worlds registration indicated that she was born in 1989.
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Original:  The F.I.G. responded in October 2010 by provisionally banning North Korea from competition for one month, which effectively barred them from the 2010 World Championships.
Revised:  The FIG responded in October 2010 by provisionally banning North Korea from competition for one month, which effectively barred them from the 2010 World Championships.
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Original:  No Worlds for North Korea " Amanda Turner, International Gymnast, October 14, 2010 In November 2010, the F.I.G. extended the ban until October 5, 2012, fined the North Korean Federation $20,800, and banned Hong from competing even in national competition within North Korea.
Revised:  No Worlds for North Korea " Amanda Turner, International Gymnast, October 14, 2010 In November 2010, the FIG extended the ban until October 5, 2012, fined the North Korean Federation $20,800, and banned Hong from competing even in national competition within North Korea.
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Original:  "North Korea banned 2 years for age falsification" Associated Press, November 5, 2010 During the 2008 Summer Olympics the age of four Chinese gymnasts — He Kexin, Jiang Yuyuan, Deng Linlin, and Yang Yilin — was brought into question, with many foreign media outlets speculating that they were underage during the Olympics.
Revised:  During the 2008 Summer Olympics the age of four Chinese gymnasts — He Kexin, Jiang Yuyuan, Deng Linlin, and Yang Yilin — was brought into question, with many foreign media outlets speculating that they were underage during the Olympics.
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Original:  "North Korea banned 2 years for age falsification" Associated Press, November 5, 2010 During the 2008 Summer Olympics the age of four Chinese gymnasts — He Kexin, Jiang Yuyuan, Deng Linlin, and Yang Yilin — was brought into question, with many foreign media outlets speculating that they were underage during the Olympics.
Revised:  "North Korea banned 2 years for age falsification" Associated Press, November 5, 2010 During the 2008 Summer Olympics the age of four Chinese gymnasts – He Kexin, Jiang Yuyuan, Deng Linlin, and Yang Yilin — was brought into question, with many foreign media outlets speculating that they were underage during the Olympics.
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Original:  "North Korea banned 2 years for age falsification" Associated Press, November 5, 2010 During the 2008 Summer Olympics the age of four Chinese gymnasts — He Kexin, Jiang Yuyuan, Deng Linlin, and Yang Yilin — was brought into question, with many foreign media outlets speculating that they were underage during the Olympics.
Revised:  "North Korea banned 2 years for age falsification" Associated Press, November 5, 2010 During the 2008 Summer Olympics the age of four Chinese gymnasts — He Kexin, Jiang Yuyuan, Deng Linlin, and Yang Yilin – was brought into question, with many foreign media outlets speculating that they were underage during the Olympics.
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Original:  The oldest female gymnast currently competing in senior international events  is Uzbekistan's Oksana Chusovitina, (b. 1975) who was  old at the 2016 Summer Olympics.
Revised:  The oldest female gymnast competing in senior international events is Uzbekistan's Oksana Chusovitina, (b. 1975) who was old at the 2016 Summer Olympics.
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Original:  Physically, younger gymnasts, particularly those who have not yet gone through puberty, tend to be lighter, smaller, more pliable and flexible, which aids them in performing more complex skills and gives them a better strength-to-weight ratio.
Revised:  Physically, younger gymto be lighter, smaller, more pliable and flexible, which aids them in performing more complex skills and gives them a better strength-to-weight ratio.
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Original: University of Calcutta alumni Category:University of Calcutta faculty Category:Vice Chancellors of the University of Calcutta Category:Judges of the International Military Tribunal for the Far East Category:International Law Commission officials Category:India–Japan relations Category:People from Kushtia District Category:Judges of the Calcutta High Court Category:Indian officials of the United Nations Category:Indian judges of international courts and tribuna
Revised: University of Calcutta alumni Category:University of Calcutta faculty Category:Vice Chancellors of the University of Calcutta Category:Judges of the International Military Tribunal for the Far East Category:International Law Commission officials Category:India–Japan relations Category:People from Kushtia District Category:Judges of the Calcutta High Court Category:Indian officials of the United Nations Category:Indian judges of international courts and tribunals Category:Indian judg
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Original: Radhabinod Pal (27 January 1886 – 10 January 1967) was an British Indian (Present Bangladesh ) jurist who was a member of the United Nations' International Law Commission from 1952 to 1966.
Revised: Radhabinod Pal (27 January 1886 – 10 January 1967) was an British Indian (Present Bangladeshi ) jurist who was a member of the United Nations' International Law Commission from 1952 to 1966.
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Original: Radhabinod Pal (27 January 1886 – 10 January 1967) was a British Indian (Present Bangladeshi) jurist who was a member of the United Nations' International Law Commission from 1952 to 1966.
Revised: Radhabinod Pal (27 January 1886 – 10 January 1967) was a British Indian jurist who was a member of the United Nations' International Law Commission from 1952 to 1966.
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Original: Radhabinod Pal (27 January 1886 – 10 January 1967) was a British Indian jurist who was a member of the United Nations' International Law Commission from 1952 to 1966.
Revised: Radhabinod Pal (27 January 1886 – 10 January 1967) was an Indian jurist who was a member of the United Nations' International Law Commission from 1952 to 1966.
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Original:  It is also common after wedding celebrations and to celebrate general election victorie
Revised:  It is also common after wedding celebrations and to celebrate election victorie
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Original: Dolichocolon - definition from CancerWeb at University of Newcastle .
Revised: Dolichocolon - definition from CancerWeb at Newcastle University .
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Original: In medicine, a dolichocolon (word derived from ancient Greek dolichos, the long distance in running, and colon) is an abnormally long large intestine.
Revised: Dolichocolon is an abnormally long large intestine.
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Original: As a five year old , his father Ma Xianda took him to train with his grandfather, Ma Fengtu where he learned his family styles Tongbeiquan, Piguaquan, Fanziquan, Bajiquan, and Cuojiao.
Revised: As a five-year-old , his father Ma Xianda took him to train with his grandfather, Ma Fengtu where he learned his family styles Tongbeiquan, Piguaquan, Fanziquan, Bajiquan, and Cuojiao.
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Original: In the second half of the 6th century, Slavs Serbs migrated from the Bay of Kotor to the River of Bojana and the hinterland of it as well as surround the Skadar lake.
Revised: In the second half of the 6th century, Slavs migrated from the Bay of Kotor to the River of Bojana and the hinterland of it as well as surround the Skadar lake.
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Original:  The Slavic (Serbians) tribes organised into a semi-independent dukedom of Duklja (Doclea) by the 9th century.
Revised:  The Slavic tribes organised into a semi-independent dukedom of Duklja (Doclea) by the 9th century.
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Original: In 1613 Arslan Pasha gathered army of over 40.000 men to attack part of Old Montenegro.
Revised: In 1613 Arslan Pasha gathered army of over 40,000 men to attack part of Old Montenegro.
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Original:  many were drowned in the waters of the Morača , many more killed by Montenegrin pursuers.
Revised:  many were drowned in the waters of the Morača . Others were killed by Montenegrin pursuers.
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Original:  At that time the whole male population of Cetinje available for war consisted of 8,027 persons, distributed among the ninety-three villages which it contained.
Revised:  At the time, the whole male population of Cetinje available for war consisted of 8,027 persons, distributed among the ninety-three villages which it contained.
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Original:  At that time the whole male population of Cetinje available for war consisted of 8,027 persons, distributed among the ninety-three villages which it contained.
Revised:  At that time the whole male population of Cetinje available for war consisted of 8,027 persons, distributed among ninety-three villages which it contained.
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Original:  the capital itself was a mere village of a few houses.
Revised:  the capital itself consisted of only a few houses.
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Original:  Still , even then , there was a system of local government.
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Original: Flags of Montenegro,about 1800 ADPetar Petrović Njegoš perhaps the most influential vladika, reigned in the first half of the 19th century.
Revised: Flags of Montenegro,about 1800 ADPetar Petrović Njegoš , an influential vladika, reigned in the first half of the 19th century.
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Original:  In 1851 Danilo Petrović Njegoš became vladika, but in 1852 he married , threw off his ecclesiastical character, assuming the title of knjaz (Prince) Danilo I, and transformed his land into a secular principality.
Revised:  In 1851 Danilo Petrović Njegoš became vladika, but in 1852 he married and renounced his ecclesiastical character, assuming the title of knjaz (Prince) Danilo I, and transformed his land into a secular principality.
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Original:  In 1861–1862, Nicholas engaged in an unsuccessful war against the Ottoman Empire with Montenegro holding onto its independence only by the skin of its teeth .
Revised:  In 1861–1862, Nicholas engaged in an unsuccessful war against the Ottoman Empire .
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Original:   Serbia joined Montenegro, but it was defeated by Turkish forces that same year.
Revised:  The Serbia joined Montenegro, but it was defeated by Turkish forces that same year.
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Original: William L. Langer, European Alliances and Alignments, 1871–1890 (2nd ed. 1950) pp 121-66 However, the gains were trimmed somewhat by the Treaty of Berlin (1878).
Revised: William L. Langer, European Alliances and Alignments, 1871–1890 (2nd ed. 1950) pp 121-66 However, the gains were somewhat trimmed by the Treaty of Berlin (1878).
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Original: The history of Montenegro begins in the early Middle Ages, into the former Roman province of Dalmatia that forms present-day Montenegro.
Revised: The history of Montenegro begins in the Early Middle Ages, into the former Roman province of Dalmatia that forms present-day Montenegro.
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Original:  Parts were controlled by  Venice.
Revised:  Parts were controlled by the Republic of Venice.
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Original:  [[File:Protest_in_Kotor,_Jan_2020.jpg|227x227px|  Law on Religion introduced in 2019 by the formerly ruling DPS, predicted the transfer of the majority of religious objects and land owned by the SPC to the Montenegrin state.
Revised:  [[File:Protest_in_Kotor,_Jan_2020.jpg|227x227px| The Law on Religion introduced in 2019 by the formerly ruling DPS, predicted the transfer of the majority of religious objects and land owned by the SPC to the Montenegrin state.
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Original:  [[File:Protest_in_Kotor,_Jan_2020.jpg|227x227px|  Law on Religion introduced in 2019 by the formerly ruling DPS, predicted the transfer of the majority of religious objects and land owned by the SPC to the Montenegrin state.
Revised:  [[File:Protest_in_Kotor,_Jan_2020.jpg|227x227px| Law on Religion introduced in 2019 by the then-ruling DPS, would have seen the transfer of the majority of religious objects and land owned by the SPC to the Montenegrin state.
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Original:  It sparked a series of massive peaceful protests.
Revised:  It sparked a series of mass protests.
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Original:  At the peak of the flood, the Red River reached a depth of 54 feet (16.46 meters) and a maximum discharge of 140,000 cubic feet per second (3,964 cubic meters per second) .
Revised:  At the peak of the flood, the Red River reached a depth of 54 feet (16.46 meters) and a maximum discharge of .
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Original:  The largest freshet ever experienced in the Fraser River occurred in 1894 and resulted in an estimated peak discharge of 17,000 cubic meters per second (600,349 cubic feet per second) and a peak height of 11.75 meters (38.55 feet) at Hope, BC.
Revised:  The largest freshet ever experienced in the Fraser River occurred in 1894 and resulted in an estimated peak discharge of and a peak height of 11.75 meters (38.55 feet) at Hope, BC.
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Original:  The largest freshet ever experienced in the Fraser River occurred in 1894 and resulted in an estimated peak discharge of 17,000 cubic meters per second (600,349 cubic feet per second) and a peak height of 11.75 meters (38.55 feet) at Hope, BC.
Revised:  The largest freshet ever experienced in the Fraser River occurred in 1894 and resulted in an estimated peak discharge of 17,000 cubic meters per second (600,349 cubic feet per second) and a peak height of at Hope, BC.
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Original:  However, due to the low population this flood had a minor impact compared to the second largest flood in 1948, which had a peak discharge of 15,200 cubic meters per second (536,783 cubic feet per second) and a peak height of 10.97 meters (36 feet) at Hope, BC.
Revised:  However, due to the low population this flood had a minor impact compared to the second largest flood in 1948, which had a peak discharge of and a peak height of 10.97 meters (36 feet) at Hope, BC.
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Original:  However, due to the low population this flood had a minor impact compared to the second largest flood in 1948, which had a peak discharge of 15,200 cubic meters per second (536,783 cubic feet per second) and a peak height of 10.97 meters (36 feet) at Hope, BC.
Revised:  However, due to the low population this flood had a minor impact compared to the second largest flood in 1948, which had a peak discharge of 15,200 cubic meters per second (536,783 cubic feet per second) and a peak height of at Hope, BC.
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Original:  At the peak of the flood on June 24, 1972, the instantaneous peak flow was greater than 32,000 cubic meters per second (1,130,069 cubic feet per second) , and at the mouth of the river, the concentration of suspended solids was greater than 10,000 milligrams per liter.
Revised:  At the peak of the flood on June 24, 1972, the instantaneous peak flow was greater than , and at the mouth of the river, the concentration of suspended solids was greater than 10,000 milligrams per liter.
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Original:  Its full title is " Herein is contained the Golden Summary of the Principles of Statecraft as established by the Ancient Khans " . Mongolian scholars typically call the work the "Lu Altan Tovch".
Revised:  Its full title is Herein is contained the Golden Summary of the Principles of Statecraft as established by the Ancient Khans " . Mongolian scholars typically call the work the "Lu Altan Tovch".
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Original:  Its full title is " Herein is contained the Golden Summary of the Principles of Statecraft as established by the Ancient Khans " . Mongolian scholars typically call the work the "Lu Altan Tovch".
Revised:  Its full title is " Herein is contained the Golden Summary of the Principles of Statecraft as established by the Ancient Khans . Mongolian scholars typically call the work the "Lu Altan Tovch".
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Original: The Altan Tobchi, or Golden Summary (Mongolian Cyrillic: Алтан товч, Mongolian script: ᠠᠯᠲᠠᠨ ᠲᠣᠪᠴᠢ ), is a 17th-century Mongolian chronicle written by Guush Luvsandanzan.
Revised: The Altan Tobchi, or Golden Summary (Mongolian script: ᠠᠯᠲᠠᠨ ᠲᠣᠪᠴᠢ ), is a 17th-century Mongolian chronicle written by Guush Luvsandanzan.
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Original:  It begins with a mythological genealogy of the descent of Borte Chino, the ancestor of Genghis Khan, from King Mahasammadi of India and various Tibetan rulers like Namri Songtsen (the grandfather of Borte Chino and father of Tengri Khan  .
Revised:  It begins with a mythological genealogy of the descent of Borte Chino, the ancestor of Genghis Khan, from King Mahasammadi of India and various Tibetan rulers like Namri Songtsen (the grandfather of Borte Chino and father of Tengri Khan ) .
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Original:  The second major section ends with the chapters of the Secret History dealing with the last deeds and passing away of Genghis Khan.
Revised:  The second major section ends with the chapters of the Secret History dealing with the last deeds and death of Genghis Khan.
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Original: 250px|Oceanic  crust is formed at an oceanic ridge, while the lithosphere is subducted back into the asthenosphere at trenches.
Revised: 250px|Oceanic the crust is formed at an oceanic ridge, while the lithosphere is subducted back into the asthenosphere at trenches.
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Original:  Marine geology or geological oceanography is the study of the history and structure of the ocean floor.
Revised:  Marinae geology or geological oceanography is the study of the history and structure of the ocean floor.
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Original:  Teng gave himself a Japanese-style pen-name as Karasaki Yau ( 唐崎夜雨 ) and a formal name called Higashida Gyōu (東田曉雨) .
Revised:  Teng gave himself a Japanese-style pen-name as Karasaki Yau ( ) and a formal name called Higashida Gyōu (東田曉雨) .
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Original:  Teng gave himself a Japanese-style pen-name as Karasaki Yau ( 唐崎夜雨 ) and a formal name called Higashida Gyōu (東田曉雨) .
Revised:  Teng gave himself a Japanese-style pen-name as Karasaki Yau ( 唐崎夜雨 ) and a formal name called Higashida Gyōu .
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Original:  Teng gave himself a Japanese-style pen-name as Karasaki Yau () and a formal name called Higashida Gyōu .
Revised:  Teng gave himself a Japanese-style pen-name as Karasaki Yau and a formal name called Higashida Gyōu .
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Original:  SongMeaningSongwriter YearNote大稻埕行進曲March of the Daitotei1932一個紅蛋 A Red EggLee Lim-chhiu1932望春風 / Bāng Chhun-hongDesire to the Spring BreezeLee Lim-chhiu1933rewritten as Mother Earth is Calling on You (大地は招く) by Japanese Army月夜愁 / Go̍at Iā ChhiûChou Tien-wang (周添旺)1933Mandarin Chinese version:
Revised:  SongMeaningSongwriter YearNote大稻埕行進曲March of the Daitotei1932一個紅蛋 A Red EggLee Lim-chhiu1932望春風 / Bāng Chhun-hongDesire to the Spring BreezeLee Lim-chhiu1933rewritten as Mother Earth is Calling on You (大地は招く) by Japanese Army月夜愁 / Go̍at Iā ChhiûChou Tien-wang (周添旺)1933Mandarin version:
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