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Original: Following a phyrrhic victory by  Thai Rak Thai  that saw Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigning to try to defuse the country's political crisis, it remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
Revised: Following a phyrrhic victory by the Thai Rak Thai that saw Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigning to try to defuse the country's political crisis, it remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
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Original: Following a phyrrhic victory by  Thai Rak Thai  that saw Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigning to try to defuse the country's political crisis, it remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
Revised: Following a phyrrhic victory by Thai Rak Thai party that saw Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigning to try to defuse the country's political crisis, it remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
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Original:  The Thai-based English language paper, the Bangkok Post reports that seven of the 38 constituencies where Thai Rak Thai (lit.
Revised:  In 38 constituencies where Thai Rak Thai (lit.
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Original:  The Thai-based English language paper, the Bangkok Post reports that seven of the 38 constituencies where Thai Rak Thai (lit.
Revised:  The Thai-based English language paper, the Bangkok Post reports that seven of the 38 constituencies , Thai Rak Thai (lit.
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Original:  A reading of the constitution reveals  the only likely fallback position would involve intervention from the monarch.
Revised:  A reading of the constitution reveals that the only likely fallback position would involve intervention from the monarch.
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Original: Following a phyrrhic victory by the Thai Rak Thai party that saw Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigning to try to defuse the country's political crisis , it remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
Revised: Following a phyrrhic victory by the Thai Rak Thai party , Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigning to try to defuse the country's political crisis , it remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
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Original: Following a phyrrhic victory by the Thai Rak Thai party that saw Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigning to try to defuse the country's political crisis , it remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
Revised: Following a phyrrhic victory by the Thai Rak Thai party that saw Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigned to try to defuse the country's political crisis , it remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
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Original: Following a phyrrhic victory by the Thai Rak Thai party that saw Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigning to try to defuse the country's political crisis , it remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
Revised: Following a phyrrhic victory by the Thai Rak Thai party that saw Thailand's caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra resigning to try to defuse the country's political crisis . It remains unclear what the eventual outcome will be.
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Original:  Thais love Thais) stood unopposed and failed to garner support from the required 20\% of the eligible voters.
Revised:  Thais love Thais) stood unopposed and failed to garner support from the required 20\% of eligible voters.
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Original:  The Lunar Reconnaissance Orbiter (LRO), whose main mission pertains to mapping the moon, will send a spent fuel stage and an impactor probe towards a crater on the South Pole of the moon .
Revised:  The Lunar Reconnaissance Orbiter (LRO), whose main mission pertains to mapping the moon, will send a spent fuel stage and an impactor probe towards a crater on the South Pole .
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Original:  The crater seems to be rich in Hydrogen , and possibly ice.
Revised:  The crater seems to be rich in Hydrogen and possibly ice.
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Original:  The crater seems to be rich in Hydrogen and possibly ice.
Revised:  The crater seems to be rich in hydrogen and possibly ice.
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Original:   Voyager 1 had been launched on October 5, 1977 by NASA and has transmitted the first close-up pictures of Jupiter and Saturn.
Revised:  Voyager 1 had been launched on October 5, 1977 by NASA and was the first spacecraft to transmit the first close-up pictures of Jupiter and Saturn.
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Original:  Category :Science and technology Category :Spa
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Original: Voyager 1 had been launched on September 5, 1977 by NASA and was the first spacecraft to transmit the first close-up pictures of Jupiter and Saturn.
Revised: Voyager 1 had been launched on September 5, 1977 by NASA and was the first spacecraft to transmit close-up pictures of Jupiter and Saturn.
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Original:  The nuclear powered probe continues to measure the properties of the interstellar magnetic field . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External Links Voyager at NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory category:Science and technology category:Spa
Revised:  The nuclear powered probe continues to measure the properties of the interstellar magnetic field Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External Links Voyager at NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory category:Science and technology category:Spa
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Original:  The nuclear powered probe continues to measure the properties of the interstellar magnetic field . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External Links Voyager at NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory category:Science and technology category:Spa
Revised:  The nuclear powered probe continues to measure the properties of the interstellar magnetic field . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External Links Voyager at NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory category:Science and technology category:Spa
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Original:  The nuclear powered probe continues to measure the properties of the interstellar magnetic field . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External Links Voyager at NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory category:Science and technology category:Spa
Revised:  The nuclear powered probe continues to measure the properties of the interstellar magnetic field . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External Links Voyager at NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory 
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Original:  In 2004 Voyager 1 entered the termination shock region, the region where the solar wind has weakened enough to mix with the interstellar medium, thereby leaving the Sol system.
Revised:  In 2004 Voyager 1 entered the termination shock region, the region where the solar wind has weakened enough to mix with the interstellar medium, thereby leaving the Solar_System system.
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Original:  In 2004 Voyager 1 entered the termination shock region, the region where the solar wind has weakened enough to mix with the interstellar medium, thereby leaving the Sol system .
Revised:  In 2004 Voyager 1 entered the termination shock region, the region where the solar wind has weakened enough to mix with the interstellar medium, thereby leaving the Solar System .
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Original:  In 2004 Voyager 1 entered the termination shock region, the region where the solar wind has weakened enough to mix with the interstellar medium, thereby leaving the Solar System .
Revised:  In 2004 Voyager 1 entered the termination shock region, the region where the solar wind has weakened enough to mix with the interstellar medium, thereby leaving the Sol system .
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Original: 200px|Phil Mickelson at the 2004 Masters Yesterday, in Augusta, Georgia at Augusta National Golf Course , Phil Mickelson won the Masters with a final round 69 and a four round score of 281, seven under par and two strokes better than 2nd placer Tim Clark from South Africa.
Revised: 200px|Phil Mickelson at the 2004 Masters Yesterday, in Augusta, Georgia at Augusta National Golf Club , Phil Mickelson won the Masters with a final round 69 and a four round score of 281, seven under par and two strokes better than 2nd placer Tim Clark from South Africa.
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Original: 200px|Phil Mickelson at the 2004 Masters Yesterday, in Augusta, Georgia at Augusta National Golf Club, Phil Mickelson won the Masters with a final round 69 and a four round score of 281, seven under par and two strokes better than 2nd placer Tim Clark from South Africa  .
Revised: 200px|Phil Mickelson at the 2004 Masters Yesterday, in Augusta, Georgia at Augusta National Golf Club, Phil Mickelson won the Masters with a final round 69 and a four round score of 281, seven under par and two strokes better Tim Clark from South Africa .
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Original:  Tied for third at four under  were Jose Maria Olazabal,  Tiger Woods, Fred Couples, and Retief Goosen .
Revised:  Tied for third at four under were Jose Maria Olazabal, Retief Goosen, Tiger Woods, Fred Couples, and Retief Goosen .
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Original: 200px|Phil Mickelson at the 2004 Masters Yesterday, in Augusta, Georgia at Augusta National Golf Club,  Phil Mickelson won the Masters with a final round  69 and a four round  score of 281, seven under par and two strokes better Tim Clark from South Africa who finished soley in second place .
Revised: 200px|Phil Mickelson at the 2004 Masters Yesterday, in Augusta, Georgia at Augusta National Golf Club, American Phil Mickelson won the Masters with a final round 69 and a four round score of 281, seven under par and two strokes better Tim Clark from South Africa who finished soley in second place .
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Original: 200px|Phil Mickelson at the 2004 Masters Yesterday, in Augusta, Georgia at Augusta National Golf Club,  Phil Mickelson won the Masters with a final round  69 and a four round  score of 281, seven under par and two strokes better Tim Clark from South Africa who finished soley in second place .
Revised: 200px|Phil Mickelson at the 2004 Masters Yesterday, in Augusta, Georgia at Augusta National Golf Club, Phil Mickelson won the Masters with a final round score of 69 and a four round score of 281, seven under par and two strokes better Tim Clark from South Africa who finished soley in second place .
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Original:  In a five-way tie for third place at four under par were Jose Maria Olazabal , Retief Goosen, Tiger Woods, Chad Campbell, and Fred Couples.
Revised:  In a five-way tie for third place at four under par were José María Olazábal , Retief Goosen, Tiger Woods, Chad Campbell, and Fred Couples.
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Original:  As Queen Elizabeth II approaches her 80th birthday,  Buckingham Palace has released 80 little known facts about her to mark Her Majesty's 80th birthday on April 21.
Revised:  As Queen Elizabeth II approaches her 80th birthday, on April 21, Buckingham Palace has released 80 little known facts about her to mark Her Majesty's 80th birthday on April 21.
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Original:  As Queen Elizabeth II approaches her 80th birthday,  Buckingham Palace has released 80 little known facts about her to mark Her Majesty's 80th birthday on April 21.
Revised:  As Queen Elizabeth II approaches her 80th birthday, Buckingham Palace has released 80 little known facts about her .
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Original:  Her Majesty owns all dolphins, porpoises, and sturgeons in British waters , was once given two black beavers as a gift .
Revised:  Did you know that; The Queen owns all dolphins, porpoises, and sturgeons in British waters , was once given two black beavers as a gift .
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Original:  Her Majesty owns all dolphins, porpoises, and sturgeons in British waters , was once given two black beavers as a gift .
Revised:  Her Majesty owns all dolphins, porpoises, and sturgeons in British waters .
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Original:  And she has owned more than 30 corgis in her reign , starting with Susan who was her 18th birthday present.
Revised:  And she has owned more than 30 corgis , starting with Susan who was her 18th birthday present.
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Original:  In 2002, at 76 years of age,  The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee.
Revised:  And in 2002, at 76 years of age, The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee.
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Original:  In 2002, at 76 years of age,  The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee.
Revised:  In 2002, at 76 years of age, that The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee.
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Original:  And in 2002, at 76 years of age, that The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee . Links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:United Kingdom Category:Euro
Revised:  And in 2002, at 76 years of age, that The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee Links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:United Kingdom Category:Euro
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Original:  And in 2002, at 76 years of age, that The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee . Links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:United Kingdom Category:Euro
Revised:  And in 2002, at 76 years of age, that The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:United Kingdom Category:Euro
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Original:  And in 2002, at 76 years of age, that The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee . Links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:United Kingdom Category:Euro
Revised:  And in 2002, at 76 years of age, that The Queen was the oldest monarch to celebrate a Golden Jubilee . Links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Preliminary results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house of parliament with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Liberta coalition.
Revised:  Preliminary results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house or Chamber of Deputies with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Liberta coalition.
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Original:  Preliminary results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house of parliament with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Liberta coalition.
Revised:  Preliminary results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house of parliament with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Libertà (Lit. "The House of Freedoms") coalition.
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Original:  The winning party automatically receives a minimum of 55\% of the seats in the lower house, giving Prodi at least 340 seats in the 630-seat House of Deputies .
Revised:  The winning party automatically receives a minimum of 55\% of the seats in the lower house, giving Prodi at least 340 seats in the 630-seat Chamber .
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Original: Italian opposition leader Romano Prodi, leader of the center-left coalition L'Unione (Lit. "The Union"), claimed victory today in parliamentary elections held Sunday and Monday, but Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi disputes the claim . Preliminary results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house or Chamber of Deputies with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Libertà (Lit. "The House of Freedoms") coalition.
Revised: Italian opposition leader Romano Prodi, leader of the center-left coalition L'Unione (Lit. "The Union"), was declared the victor today in parliamentary elections held Sunday and Monday, but Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi disputes the claim . Preliminary results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house or Chamber of Deputies with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Libertà (Lit. "The House of Freedoms") coalition.
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Original: Italian opposition leader Romano Prodi, leader of the center-left coalition L'Unione (Lit. "The Union"), claimed victory today in parliamentary elections held Sunday and Monday, but Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi disputes the claim . Preliminary results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house or Chamber of Deputies with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Libertà (Lit. "The House of Freedoms") coalition.
Revised: Italian opposition leader Romano Prodi, leader of the center-left coalition L'Unione (Lit. "The Union"), claimed victory today in parliamentary elections held Sunday and Monday, but Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi has yet to concede his office . Preliminary results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house or Chamber of Deputies with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Libertà (Lit. "The House of Freedoms") coalition.
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Original: Italian opposition leader Romano Prodi, leader of the center-left coalition L'Unione (Lit. "The Union"), claimed victory today in parliamentary elections held Sunday and Monday, but Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi disputes the claim . Preliminary results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house or Chamber of Deputies with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Libertà (Lit. "The House of Freedoms") coalition.
Revised: Italian opposition leader Romano Prodi, leader of the center-left coalition L'Unione (Lit. "The Union"), claimed victory today in parliamentary elections held Sunday and Monday, but Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi disputes the claim . Official but not yet confirmed results indicate that L'Unione won control of the lower house or Chamber of Deputies with 49.8\% of the vote to 49.7\% for Berlusconi's center-right Casa delle Libertà (Lit. "The House of Freedoms") coalition.
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Original:  His spokesman also indicated that his party would request a recount.
Revised:  His spokesman also indicated that his party has requested a recount.
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Original:  According to police, the victims were killed by gunshot .
Revised:  According to police, the victims were shot dead .
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Original:  The report also said that US special forces were already operating in Iran gathering target information.
Revised:  The story also said that US special forces were already operating in Iran gathering target information.
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Original: When asked about the veracity of the claims made in the New Yorker article, the White House said "As the President has indicated, we are pursuing a diplomatic solution ” . The Defense Department also said that Iran was being dealt with through "diplomatic channels".
Revised: When asked about the veracity of the claims made in the New Yorker article, the White House said "As the President has indicated, we are pursuing a diplomatic solution " . The Defense Department also said that Iran was being dealt with through "diplomatic channels".
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Original: Lawyer Zach Scruggs, a lawyer for United States Senator Trent Lott says that State Farm Insurance Company is destroying records  . Scruggs said that Lott has "good faith belief" that many employees of the insurance company in Biloxi, Mississippi are destroying the engineer reports that are conflicting as to whether or not water or wind was the main cause of damage to the buildings affected by the hurricane.
Revised: Lawyer Zach Scruggs, a lawyer for United States Senator Trent Lott says that State Farm Insurance Company is destroying records . Scruggs said that Lott has "good faith belief" that many employees of the insurance company in Biloxi, Mississippi are destroying engineer's reports that are conflicting as to whether or not water or wind was the main cause of damage to the buildings affected by the hurricane.
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Original:  Lott is among thousands of home and or business owners that had their buildings damaged or destroyed by floods caused by the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claims that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind  
Revised:  Lott is among thousands of home and or business owners who had their property damaged or destroyed by floods caused by the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claims that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind 
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Original:  Lott is among thousands of home and or business owners that had their buildings damaged or destroyed by floods caused by the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claims that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind  
Revised:  Lott is among thousands of home and or business owners that had their buildings damaged or destroyed during the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claims that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind 
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Original:  Lott is among thousands of home and or business owners that had their buildings damaged or destroyed by floods caused by the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claims that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind  
Revised:  Lott is among thousands of home and or business owners that had their buildings damaged or destroyed by floods caused by the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claims that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind . 
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Original: Lawyer Zach Scruggs, a lawyer for United States Senator Trent Lott  says that State Farm Insurance Company is destroying records related to claims from Hurrican Katrinadamage .
Revised: Lawyer Zach Scruggs, a lawyer for United States Senator Trent Lott , says that State Farm Insurance Company is destroying records related to claims from Hurrican Katrinadamage .
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Original: Lawyer Zach Scruggs, a lawyer for United States Senator Trent Lott  says that State Farm Insurance Company is destroying records related to claims from Hurrican Katrinadamage .
Revised: Lawyer Zach Scruggs, a lawyer for United States Senator Trent Lott says that State Farm Insurance Company is destroying records related to claims for damage from Hurricane Katrina .
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Original:  Lott is among thousands of home and  or business owners who had their property damaged or destroyed during the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claims that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind.
Revised:  Lott is among thousands of home and / or business owners who had their property damaged or destroyed during the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claims that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind.
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Original:  Lott is among thousands of home and  or business owners who had their property damaged or destroyed during the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claims that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind.
Revised:  Lott is among thousands of home and or business owners who had their property damaged or destroyed during the hurricane and had their claims denied because State Farm claimed that their policies don't cover damage caused by floods or water that was driven by the wind.
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Original: Rapper Proof was shot and killed on 11 April 2006 at  4:30am at the Triple C Club on 8 Mile Road . Proof was known for his work together with  good friend Eminem and his group D12.
Revised: Rapper Proof was shot and killed on 11 April 2006 at approximately 4:30am at the Triple C Club on 8 Mile Road . Proof was known for his work together with good friend Eminem and his group D12.
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