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Original:  Then it was a hardy play-off for both teams, especially the Dutch, but Torbinsky and Arshavin 's final goals effectively put an ending dot
Revised:  Then it was a hardy play-off for both teams, especially the Dutch, but Torbinsky and Arshavin 's final goals effectively put an end to the match
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Original: The Netherlands lost to the Russia national football team in a quarter-final match of UEFA Euro 2008.
Revised: The lost to the Russia national football team in a quarter-final match of UEFA Euro 2008.
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Original: The Netherlands lost to the Russia national football team in a quarter-final match of UEFA Euro 2008.
Revised: The Netherlands lost to the in a quarter-final match of UEFA Euro 2008.
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Original:  Roman Pavlyuchenko opened the scoring in main play, a goal that was matched by Ruud van Nistelrooy after only 30 minutes.
Revised:  opened the scoring in main play, a goal that was matched by Ruud van Nistelrooy after only 30 minutes.
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Original:  Roman Pavlyuchenko opened the scoring in main play, a goal that was matched by Ruud van Nistelrooy after only 30 minutes.
Revised:  Roman Pavlyuchenko opened the scoring in main play, a goal that was matched by after only 30 minutes.
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Original:  Then it was a hardy play-off for both teams, especially the Dutch, but Torbinsky and Arshavin scored goals, effectively put an end to the match.
Revised:  Then it was a hardy play-off for both teams, especially the Dutch, but and scored goals, effectively put an end to the match.
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Original:  Now it will be the first major semi final for Russia since the break up of the USSR
Revised:  Now it will be the first major semi final for Russia since the 
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Original: At least twelve people have died and 32 were injured because of a human stampede .
Revised: At least 12 people have died and 32 were injured because of a human stampede .
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Original: At least twelve people have died and 32 were injured because of a human stampede .
Revised: At least twelve people have died and 32 have been injured because of a human stampede .
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Original:  About 1000 people tried to leave the place at the same time througn the only door during a police raid.
Revised:  About 1,000 people tried to leave the place at the same time througn the only door during a police raid.
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Original:  About 1000 people tried to leave the place at the same time througn the only door during a police raid.
Revised:  About 1000 people tried to leave the club at the same time througn the only door during a police raid.
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Original:  About 1000 people tried to leave the place at the same time througn the only door during a police raid.
Revised:  About 1000 people tried to leave the place at the same time through the only accessible door during a police raid.
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Original:  Its owner, Alfredo Maya Ortiz, told the young people to go out due to the authorities' appearance.
Revised:  The establishment's owner, Alfredo Maya Ortiz, told the young people to go out due to the authorities' appearance.
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Original:  Its owner, Alfredo Maya Ortiz, told the young people to go out due to the authorities' appearance.
Revised:  Its owner, Alfredo Maya Ortiz, told those in the club to leave due to the authorities' appearance.
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Original:  The Secretaría de Seguridad Pública (Public Safety, SSP) police officers came to the club at 5 PM because they have been given some reports about alcohol sale to minors.
Revised:  The Secretaría de Seguridad Pública (Public Safety, SSP) police officers arrived at the club at 5 PM because they have been given some reports about alcohol sale to minors.
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Original:  The Secretaría de Seguridad Pública (Public Safety, SSP) police officers came to the club at 5 PM because they have been given some reports about alcohol sale to minors.
Revised:  The Secretaría de Seguridad Pública (Public Safety, SSP) police officers came to the club at 5pm after being informed of alcohol sales to minors.
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Original:  When it happened, Maya Ortiz said using the sound system : "Let's a evacuate the place because there is a police raid and they indicated it".
Revised:  During the raid, Ortiz used the sound system : "Let's a evacuate the place because there is a police raid and they indicated it".
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Original:  Also, six teenagers between 18 and 22 years old and three policemen have passed away .
Revised:  Also, six teenagers between 18 and 22 years old and three policemen .
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Original:  Some of them lost their lives because they were flattened by the doors when the people tried to open them .
Revised:  Some of the victims lost their lives because they were flattened by the doors when the people tried to open them .
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Original:  Some of them lost their lives because they were flattened by the doors when the people tried to open them .
Revised:  Some of them lost their lives because they were flattened by the doors being opened .
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Original:  Others perished because they fell to the floor and where trampled by the stampede.
Revised:  Others perished after falling to the floor and where trampled by the stampede.
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Original:  Others perished because they fell to the floor and where trampled by the stampede.
Revised:  Others perished because they fell to the floor and getting trampled by the stampede.
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Original:  There are also some deaths for cars which unintentionally ran over some people.
Revised:  There were a number of deaths due to cars unintentionally running over people.
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Original:  All the bodies were moved to the GAM 5 territorial coordination.
Revised:  All bodies were moved to the GAM 5 territorial coordination.
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Original:  Some of them where hitted and moved to some buses.
Revised:  Some of them where hit and moved to some buses.
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Original:  When they (the police) wasn [  't looking at us, I took one of my friends and started to run", said a reserved source.
Revised:  When they [ 't looking at us, I took one of my friends and started to run", said a reserved source.
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Original:  When they (the police) wasn [  't looking at us, I took one of my friends and started to run", said a reserved source.
Revised:  When they (the police) wasn [the police 't looking at us, I took one of my friends and started to run", said a reserved source.
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Original:  When they (the police) wasn [  't looking at us, I took one of my friends and started to run", said a reserved source.
Revised:  When they (the police) wasn [ weren 't looking at us, I took one of my friends and started to run", said a reserved source.
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Original:  As well as the owner,  Mariana de la Cruz Gayoso (employee) and a person whose name is not known are arrested.
Revised:  In addition to the owner, Mariana de la Cruz Gayoso (employee) and a person whose name is not known are arrested.
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Original:  As well as the owner,  Mariana de la Cruz Gayoso (employee) and a person whose name is not known are arrested.
Revised:  As well as the owner, Mariana de la Cruz Gayoso and an unidentified person have been arrested.
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Original:  News Divine has been opened since three years ago and it had been closed three times by the law.
Revised:  News Divine has been open for three years and in that time has been closed three times by the law.
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Original:  The last time was at the beginning of this year.
Revised:  Most recently, it was closed earlier this year.
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Original:  In addition, there are many reports and complaints for drug sale , fights and aggressions to neighbors
Revised:  There have been many reports and complaints for drug sale , fights and aggressions to neighbors
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Original:  In addition, there are many reports and complaints for drug sale , fights and aggressions to neighbors
Revised:  In addition, there are many reports and complaints of drug sales , fights and aggressions to neighbors
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Original:  In addition, there are many reports and complaints for drug sale , fights and aggressions to neighbors
Revised:  In addition, there are many reports and complaints for drug sale , fights and aggression around the club
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Original:  He or she also confirmed that drugs where sold there and the club was only a "small two-storey club that was always crowded".
Revised:  He or she also confirmed that drugs were sold there and the club was only a "small two-storey club that was always crowded".
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Original:  He or she also confirmed that drugs where sold there and the club was only a "small two-storey club that was always crowded".
Revised:  He or she also confirmed that drugs where sold there and the club was only a "small two-story club that was always crowded".
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Original:  There have been many reports and complaints of drug sales, fights  and aggression around the club
Revised:  There have been many reports and complaints of drug sales, fights , and aggression around the club
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Original:  Three minors are confirmed dead following the incident, as well as six teenagers between 18 and 22 years old and three policemen.
Revised:  Three minors are confirmed dead following the incident, as are six teenagers between 18 and 22 years old and three policemen.
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Original:  Mugabe himself," and is therefore not fair  
Revised:  Mugabe himself," and is therefore not fair . 
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Original:  "The courageous people of this country and the peole of the MDC have done everything humanly and democratically possible to deliver a new Zimbabwe and a new government."
Revised:  "The courageous people of this country and the people of the MDC have done everything humanly and democratically possible to deliver a new Zimbabwe and a new government."
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Original:  Ince will be unveiled at a press conference at Ewood Park on Tuesday 24th of June.
Revised:  Ince was unveiled at a press conference at Ewood Park on Tuesday 24th of June.
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Original:  His teammate Nelson Piquet Jr. passed Alonso on the closing laps of the race after a slight driving error by the Spaniard  
Revised:  His teammate Nelson Piquet Jr. passed Alonso on the closing laps of the race after a slight driving error by the Spaniard . 
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Original: Jarno Trulli done his best to withstand Heikki Kovalainen from McLaren Mercedes pushing hard on him.
Revised: Jarno Trulli did his best to withstand Heikki Kovalainen from McLaren Mercedes pushing hard on him.
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Original: Jarno Trulli done his best to withstand Heikki Kovalainen from McLaren Mercedes pushing hard on him.
Revised: Jarno Trulli done his best to withstand Heikki Kovalainen , McLaren Mercedes, pushing hard on him.
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Original:  This achievement was dedicated to the memory of Ove Andersson, team founder  died in a rally crash recently.
Revised:  This achievement was dedicated to the memory of Ove Andersson, team founder , who died in a rally crash recently.
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Original:  "It is with great pride and a lot of joy that I announce today that we have found proof that this hard bright material is really water ice and not some other substance," said Peter Smith, the primary investigator for Phoenix, at the University of Arizona in Tuscan .
Revised:  "It is with great pride and a lot of joy that I announce today that we have found proof that this hard bright material is really water ice and not some other substance," said Peter Smith, the primary investigator for Phoenix, at the University of Arizona in Tucson .
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Original: In June of 2007, the European Space Agency's Mars Express spacecraft has discovered ice deposits in the South Pole of Mars that are larger than the state of Texas.
Revised: In June of 2007, the European Space Agency's Mars Express spacecraft discovered ice deposits in the South Pole of Mars that are larger than the state of Texas.
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Original:  The Phoenix lander  which landed on Mars on May 25, has confirmed to  scientists that the white substance it found while digging a trench on June 15 , is water ice.
Revised:  The Phoenix lander , which landed on Mars on May 25, has confirmed to scientists that the white substance it found while digging a trench on June 15 , is water ice.
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Original:  The Phoenix lander  which landed on Mars on May 25, has confirmed to  scientists that the white substance it found while digging a trench on June 15 , is water ice.
Revised:  The Phoenix lander which landed on Mars on May 25, has confirmed to scientists that the white substance it found while digging a trench on June 15 is water ice.
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Original:  Though the chunks were visible on June 16,  when Phoenix looked at the trench again on June 19, some of the material appeared to have evaporated , or melted.
Revised:  The chunks were visible on June 16, when Phoenix looked at the trench again on June 19, some of the material appeared to have evaporated , or melted.
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Original:  Though the chunks were visible on June 16,  when Phoenix looked at the trench again on June 19, some of the material appeared to have evaporated , or melted.
Revised:  Though the chunks were visible on June 16, but when Phoenix looked at the trench again on June 19, some of the material appeared to have evaporated , or melted.
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Original:  Though the chunks were visible on June 16,  when Phoenix looked at the trench again on June 19, some of the material appeared to have evaporated , or melted.
Revised:  Though the chunks were visible on June 16, when Phoenix looked at the trench again on June 19, some of the material had disappeared, implying that it may have evaporated or melted.
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Original:  They plan to test it for signs of organic material and minerals . Scientists hope to find out if the ice was ever a liquid which could have supported microbial life.
Revised:  They plan to test it for signs of organic material and minerals , and hope to find out if the ice was ever a liquid which could have supported microbial life.
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Original:  In June of 2007 , the European Space Agency's Mars Express spacecraft discovered ice deposits in the South Pole of Mars that are larger than the state of Texas.
Revised:  In June 2007 , the European Space Agency's Mars Express spacecraft discovered ice deposits in the South Pole of Mars that are larger than the state of Texas.
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Original:  In June of 2007 , the European Space Agency's Mars Express spacecraft discovered ice deposits in the South Pole of Mars that are larger than the state of Texas.
Revised:  In June of 2007 the European Space Agency's Mars Express spacecraft discovered ice deposits in the South Pole of Mars that are larger than the state of Texas.
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Original:  "It is with great pride and a lot of joy that I announce today that we have found proof that this hard bright material is really water ice and not some other substance," said Peter Smith, the primary investigator for Phoenix, at the University of Arizona in Tucson  .
Revised:  "It is with great pride and a lot of joy that I announce today that we have found proof that this hard bright material is really water ice and not some other substance," said Peter Smith, the primary investigator for Phoenix, at the University of Arizona in Tucson , Arizona .
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Original:  In June 2007 the European Space Agency 's Mars Express spacecraft discovered ice deposits in the South Pole of Mars that are larger than the state of Texas.
Revised:  In June 2007 the ESA 's Mars Express spacecraft discovered ice deposits in the South Pole of Mars that are larger than the state of Texas.
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Original:  The suicide bomb exploded at the entrance to a local government centre in the city of Baquba, which is one of the most deadly areas in Iraq. 39 people were also wounded by the attack  
Revised:  The suicide bomb exploded at the entrance to a local government centre in the city of Baquba, which is one of the most deadly areas in Iraq. 39 people were also wounded by the attack . 
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Original:  "I heard some of the injured people saying they saw a woman wearing a black robe blow herself up.    
Revised:  "I heard some of the injured people saying they saw a woman wearing a black robe blow herself up. " 
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Original:  The attack follows an effort by the Iraqi and US forces to increase the security situation in Iraq, which has suffered many attacks since the 2003 invasion by coalition forces.
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Original:  In London U2 The Rolling Stones Paul McCartney Coldplay Madonna Sting Robbie Williams Dido Elton John Keane Annie Lennox Mariah Carey Muse Scissor Sisters Joss Stone Stereophonics REM Velvet Revolver Bob Geldof The Killers The Cure Snow Patro
Revised:  In London U2 The Rolling Stones Paul McCartney Coldplay Madonna Sting Robbie Williams Dido Elton John Keane Annie Lennox Mariah Carey Muse Scissor Sisters Joss Stone Stereophonics REM Velvet Revolver Bob Geldof The Killers The Cure Snow Patrol
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Original: Bob Geldof thanked the coporations who had already come forward to sponsor the event, including the BBC and AOL.
Revised: Bob Geldof thanked the corporations who had already come forward to sponsor the event, including the BBC and AOL.
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Original:  In Rome Duran Duran Faith Hill Tim McGraw Irene Grandi Jovanotti Nek Laura Pasini Vasco Rossi Zuccher
Revised:  In Rome Duran Duran Faith Hill Tim McGraw Irene Grandi Jovanotti Nek Laura Pausini Vasco Rossi Zuccher
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Original: A poster for Live 8 In a press conference held at 13:00 UTC on Tuesday, Sir Bob Geldof, Elton John, and Harvey Goldsmith announced Live 8, a set of simultaneous free concerts to be held in Philadelphia, London, Paris, Rome, and Berlin on July 2, 2005, to raise awareness of Make Poverty History, a campaign to get the richest nations to cancel debt and increase aid to developing countries.
Revised: A poster for Live 8 In a press conference held at 13:00 UTC on Tuesday, Bob Geldof, Elton John, and Harvey Goldsmith announced Live 8, a set of simultaneous free concerts to be held in Philadelphia, London, Paris, Rome, and Berlin on July 2, 2005, to raise awareness of Make Poverty History, a campaign to get the richest nations to cancel debt and increase aid to developing countries.
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Original: Senator Allison predicted that tensions between the Labor Party - who won a majority in the House of Representatives in the elction - and the Greens would result in a double dissolution election.
Revised: Senator Allison predicted that tensions between the Labor Party - who won a majority in the House of Representatives in the election - and the Greens would result in a double dissolution election.
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Original:  He has also appeared in several movies such as Dogma .
Revised:  He appeared in several movies such as Dogma .
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Original:  Carlin also suffered from a cocaine addiction throughout his life and was self-admitted to a rehab clinic in 2004
Revised:  Carlin suffered from a cocaine addiction throughout his life and was self-admitted to a rehab clinic in 2004
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Original:  One of the conditions was extension of the runway and provision of an adequate Runway End Safety Area (RESA)   
Revised:  One of the conditions was extension of the runway and provision of an adequate Runway End Safety Area (RESA) . 
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Original:  Allegedly, the ATSB had missed the licnsing discrepency because they only checked the front page of the airport's lisence and did not conduct a detailed analysis of the small print   
Revised:  Allegedly, the ATSB had missed the licnsing discrepency because they only checked the front page of the airport's lisence and did not conduct a detailed analysis of the small print . 
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Original:  The group says it notified the International Civil Aviation Organisation (ICAO), and that they  said the Australian Transport Safety Bureau (ATSB)  was in control of the situation.
Revised:  The group says it notified the International Civil Aviation Organisation (ICAO), and that they in turn said the Australian Transport Safety Bureau (ATSB) was in control of the situation.
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Original:  All Indonesia's air carriers are currently on the list of air carriers banned in the EU  [ [  
Revised:  All Indonesia's air carriers are currently on the list of air carriers banned in the EU . [ [ 
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Original:  The final report found that the pilot-in-command, who has been arrested and charged over the crash, attempted to land after fifteen Ground Proximity Warning System activations to tell him he was landing too fast, and says that although a longer runway and full-sized RESA wouldn't have stopped an airliner travelling at such excessive speed it could have reduced the toll of deaths and injuries  
Revised:  The final report found that the pilot-in-command, who has been arrested and charged over the crash, attempted to land after fifteen Ground Proximity Warning System activations to tell him he was landing too fast, and says that although a longer runway and full-sized RESA wouldn't have stopped an airliner travelling at such excessive speed it could have reduced the toll of deaths and injuries . 
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Original:  Allegedly, the ATSB had missed the licnsing discrepency because they only checked the front page of the airport's lisence and did not conduct a detailed analysis of the small print.
Revised:  Allegedly, the ATSB had missed the licensing discrepency because they only checked the front page of the airport's lisence and did not conduct a detailed analysis of the small print.
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Original:  Allegedly, the ATSB had missed the licensing discrepency because they only checked the front page of the airport's lisence and did not conduct a detailed analysis of the small print.
Revised:  Allegedly, the ATSB had missed the licensing discrepency because they only checked the front page of the airport's license and did not conduct a detailed analysis of the small print.
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Original:  Mardjono Siswo Suwarno of the National Transport Safety Committee, the body responsible for investigating the disaster, denied that Yogyakarta Airport was illegal, saying "At that time [the licence ] was still valid, but the RESA was not long enough...
Revised:  Mardjono Siswo Suwarno of the National Transport Safety Committee, the body responsible for investigating the disaster, denied that Yogyakarta Airport was illegal, saying "At that time [the license ] was still valid, but the RESA was not long enough...
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Original: Flight Safety Pty Ltd had been asked to carry out an independant investigation by an anonymous client after the March 2007 disaster, which occurred when the aircraft landed at excessive speed and shot off the end of the runway.
Revised: Flight Safety Pty Ltd had been asked to carry out an independent investigation by an anonymous client after the March 2007 disaster, which occurred when the aircraft landed at excessive speed and shot off the end of the runway.
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Original:  SInce these conditions remained unchanged, the license effectively voided six months before the disaster, claim Flight Safety.
Revised:  Since these conditions remained unchanged, the license effectively voided six months before the disaster, claim Flight Safety.
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