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Original:  Dear's dead body was found on July 16 (Sunday) in her classroom at Strathmore Primary School, a day before term 3 of the New Zealand primary school year was to start.
Revised:  Dear's body was found on July 16 (Sunday) in her classroom at Strathmore Primary School, a day before term 3 of the New Zealand primary school year was to start.
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Original:  Dear's dead body was found on July 16 (Sunday) in her classroom at Strathmore Primary School, a day before term 3 of the New Zealand primary school year was to start.
Revised:  Dear's dead body was found on July 16 (Sunday) in her classroom at Strathmore Primary School, one day before term 3 of the New Zealand primary school year was to start.
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Original:  Dear's dead body was found on July 16 (Sunday) in her classroom at Strathmore Primary School, a day before term 3 of the New Zealand primary school year was to start.
Revised:  Dear's dead body was found on July 16 (Sunday) in her classroom at Strathmore Primary School, a day before term three of the New Zealand primary school year was to start.
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Original:  A large amount of media and people were gathered outside the courtroom.
Revised:  A large number of media and people were gathered outside the courtroom.
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Original:  Many  people who had gathered outside the courtroom insulted him as he walked to the courtroom , one person said "You'll never make sentencing." . Armed police had also made an appearance, for the accused's protection.
Revised:  Many of the people who had gathered outside the courtroom insulted him as he walked to the courtroom , one person said "You'll never make sentencing." . Armed police had also made an appearance, for the accused's protection.
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Original:  Many  people who had gathered outside the courtroom insulted him as he walked to the courtroom , one person said "You'll never make sentencing." . Armed police had also made an appearance, for the accused's protection.
Revised:  Many people who had gathered outside the courtroom insulted the accused man as he walked to the courtroom , one person said "You'll never make sentencing." . Armed police had also made an appearance, for the accused's protection.
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Original:  Many  people who had gathered outside the courtroom insulted him as he walked to the courtroom , one person said "You'll never make sentencing." . Armed police had also made an appearance, for the accused's protection.
Revised:  Many people who had gathered outside the courtroom insulted him as he walked to the courtroom . One said "You'll never make sentencing." . Armed police had also made an appearance, for the accused's protection.
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Original:  Many  people who had gathered outside the courtroom insulted him as he walked to the courtroom , one person said "You'll never make sentencing." . Armed police had also made an appearance, for the accused's protection.
Revised:  Many people who had gathered outside the courtroom insulted him as he walked to the courtroom , one person said "You'll never make sentencing." Armed police also were present for the accused's protection.
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Original:  He has been remanded and is to appear back in court next week.
Revised:  The accused was remanded and is to appear back in court next week.
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Original: A 23-year-old Tokoroa man has been arrested  the murder of teacher Lois Dear.
Revised: A 23-year-old Tokoroa man has been arrested for the murder of teacher Lois Dear.
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Original: A 23-year-old Tokoroa man has been arrested  the murder of teacher Lois Dear.
Revised: A 23-year-old Tokoroa man has been arrested the murder of a school teacher, Lois Dear.
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Original: A large number of media and people were gathered outside the packed courtroom.
Revised: A large crowd of media personnel and onlookers gathered outside the packed courtroom.
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Original:  Many of the people who had gathered outside the courtroom insulted the accused man as he walked to the courtroom.
Revised:  Many of the people who had gathered outside the courtroom abused the accused man as he walked to the courtroom.
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Original:  Armed police also were present for the accused's protection . Related Stories Wikinews Teacher found murdered in New Zealand classroom July 17, 200
Revised:  Armed police also were deployed to protect the alleged murderer . Related Stories Wikinews Teacher found murdered in New Zealand classroom July 17, 200
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Original:  Armed police also were present for the accused's protection . Related Stories Wikinews Teacher found murdered in New Zealand classroom July 17, 200
Revised:  Armed police also were present for the accused's protection . Related Storie
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Original: A 23-year-old Tokoroa man has been arrested for the murder of a school teacher, Lois Dear.
Revised: A 23-year-old man has been arrested for the murder of a school teacher, Lois Dear.
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Original:  Dear's body was found on July 16 (Sunday) in her classroom at Strathmore Primary School , one day before term three of the New Zealand primary school year was to start.
Revised:  Dear's body was found on July 16 (Sunday) in her classroom at , one day before term three of the New Zealand primary school year was to start.
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Original:  Lebanon , which has Hezbollah members in its parliament , "must bear full responsibility.
Revised:  Lebanon has Hizballah members in its parliament , "must bear full responsibility.
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Original:  Lebanon , which has Hezbollah members in its parliament , "must bear full responsibility.
Revised:  Lebanon , which has Hezbollah members in its parliament and "must bear full responsibility.
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Original:  The cabinet will convene this evening to approve additional activity by the military in Lebanon. " 
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Original: Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert has said that the killing of 8 Israeli soldiers and the abduction of another two soldiers by Hizballah militants on July 12 was an act of war;
Revised: Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert has said that the killing of 8 Israeli soldiers and the abduction of another two soldiers by Hezballah militants on July 12 was an act of war;
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Original:  Lebanon has Hizballah members in its parliament and "must bear full responsibility.
Revised:  Lebanon has Hezballah members in its parliament and "must bear full responsibility.
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Original: Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert has said that the killing of 8 Israeli soldiers and the abduction of another two soldiers by Hezballah militants on July 12 was an act of war;
Revised: Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert has said that the killing of 8 Israeli soldiers and the abduction of another two soldiers by Hezbollah militants on July 12 was an act of war;
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Original:  Lebanon has Hezballah members in its parliament and "must bear full responsibility.
Revised:  Lebanon has Hezbollah members in its parliament and "must bear full responsibility.
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Original: frame| Logo of the World Trade Organisation The director-general of the World Trade Organisation (WTO), Pascal Lamy, suspended negotiations in the Doha round of trade talks on Monday, after a meeting of six "core" negotiators India, Brazil, the United States, European Union, Japan and Australia in Geneva failed to make any headway in reconciling differences over agricultural trade liberalisation.
Revised:  Logo of the World Trade Organisation The director-general of the World Trade Organisation (WTO), Pascal Lamy, suspended negotiations in the Doha round of trade talks on Monday, after a meeting of six "core" negotiators India, Brazil, the United States, European Union, Japan and Australia in Geneva failed to make any headway in reconciling differences over agricultural trade liberalisation.
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Original: A jewel that once belonged to the former King of ancient Egypt , Tutankhamen, is believed to have been created by an exploding meteorite entering Earth's atmosphere "hugely bigger in energy than the atomic [bomb] tests," said geophysicist John Wasson.
Revised: A jewel that once belonged to King Tutankhamen of ancient Egypt , Tutankhamen, is believed to have been created by an exploding meteorite entering Earth's atmosphere "hugely bigger in energy than the atomic [bomb] tests," said geophysicist John Wasson.
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Original: A jewel that once belonged to the former King of ancient Egypt , Tutankhamen, is believed to have been created by an exploding meteorite entering Earth's atmosphere "hugely bigger in energy than the atomic [bomb] tests," said geophysicist John Wasson.
Revised: A jewel that once belonged to the former King of ancient Egypt is believed to have been created by an exploding meteorite entering Earth's atmosphere "hugely bigger in energy than the atomic [bomb] tests," said geophysicist John Wasson.
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Original:  Up until now over 12,000 MySpace.com users have signed on as “friends” of the Marine Corp
Revised:  Up until now over 12,000 MySpace.com users have signed on as “friends” of the Marine Corps
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Original: As a result of the email, Mr Dobbie has received hundreds of e-mails and phone calls from people as far away as Australia, America and South Africa.
Revised: Due to the email, Mr Dobbie has received hundreds of e-mails and phone calls from people as far away as Australia, America and South Africa.
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Original: In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall’s smile made “time stand still”, adding that it is the “freshest of my memories”.
Revised: In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall’s smile made “time stand still”, adding that it is the “freshest of his memories”.
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Original: A man has said he has “no regrets” after a romantic e-mail he sent to a woman ended up circulating around the world.
Revised: A man has said he has "no regrets" after a romantic e-mail he sent to a woman ended up circulating around the world.
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Original:  Joseph Dobbie, who is in his late 30s and lives in Berkshire, told Kate Winsall in the e-mail: “ If I am twice as lucky as I dare to hope, you will find this note charming.
Revised:  Joseph Dobbie, who is in his late 30s and lives in Berkshire, told Kate Winsall in the e-mail: " If I am twice as lucky as I dare to hope, you will find this note charming.
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Original:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
Revised:  " In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
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Original:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
Revised:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ' s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
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Original:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
Revised:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made " time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
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Original:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
Revised:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still " , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
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Original:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
Revised:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the " freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
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Original:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
Revised:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories " . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
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Original:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ’ s Tate Modern.
Revised:  ” In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall ’ s smile made “ time stand still ” , adding that it is the “ freshest of [his] memories ” . He also said sorry for being drunk at the party the pair met, and he asked Ms Winsall out for a coffee at London ' s Tate Modern.
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Original:  He has also revealed that he has changed his phone numbers as a result of the situation: “ It got to the point where if I hung up either phone they would just ring again, ” he said.
Revised:  He has also revealed that he has changed his phone numbers as a result of the situation: " It got to the point where if I hung up either phone they would just ring again, ” he said.
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Original:  He has also revealed that he has changed his phone numbers as a result of the situation: “ It got to the point where if I hung up either phone they would just ring again, ” he said.
Revised:  He has also revealed that he has changed his phone numbers as a result of the situation: “ It got to the point where if I hung up either phone they would just ring again, " he said.
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Original:  “ My mother uses an expression ‘it’ s cool to be cruel these days ’ and I just don ’ t want that in my life, ” he said.
Revised:  " My mother uses an expression ‘it’ s cool to be cruel these days ’ and I just don ’ t want that in my life, ” he said.
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Original:  “ My mother uses an expression ‘it’ s cool to be cruel these days ’ and I just don ’ t want that in my life, ” he said.
Revised:  “ My mother uses an expression 'it' s cool to be cruel these days ’ and I just don ’ t want that in my life, ” he said.
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Original:  “ My mother uses an expression ‘it’ s cool to be cruel these days ’ and I just don ’ t want that in my life, ” he said.
Revised:  “ My mother uses an expression ‘it’ s cool to be cruel these days ' and I just don ’ t want that in my life, ” he said.
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Original:  “ My mother uses an expression ‘it’ s cool to be cruel these days ’ and I just don ’ t want that in my life, ” he said.
Revised:  “ My mother uses an expression ‘it’ s cool to be cruel these days ’ and I just don ' t want that in my life, ” he said.
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Original:  “ My mother uses an expression ‘it’ s cool to be cruel these days ’ and I just don ’ t want that in my life, ” he said.
Revised:  “ My mother uses an expression ‘it’ s cool to be cruel these days ’ and I just don ’ t want that in my life, " he said.
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Original:  “ I stood a chance with Kate.
Revised:  " I stood a chance with Kate.
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Original:  Now there’s no way she will say yes, ” Mr Dobbie said
Revised:  Now there’s no way she will say yes, " Mr Dobbie said
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Original: In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall's smile made "time stand still", adding that it is the "freshest of his memories".
Revised: In the message, which contained five hundred and sixteen words, Mr Dobbie commented on how Ms Winsall's smile made "time stand still", adding that it is the "freshest of my memories".
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Original: Shenyang, capital of the Liaoning Province where the accident took place, is a bustling metropolis.
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Original:  The blast occured at 3:49pm local time on Monday afternoon.
Revised:  The blast occurred at 3:49pm local time on Monday afternoon.
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Original:  According to the one of the drivers, two guided missiles were fired at each ambulance.
Revised:  According to one of the drivers, two guided missiles were fired at each ambulance.
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Original:  The Lebanese Red Cross demanded that Israel guaranteed their safety through the United Nations or the International Red Cross or they would cease all rescue missions.
Revised:  The Lebanese Red Cross demanded that Israel guarantee their safety through the United Nations or the International Red Cross or they would cease all rescue missions.
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Original:   South Lebanon ambulance service is run entirely by volunteers.
Revised:  The South Lebanon ambulance service is run entirely by volunteers.
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Original:  This means that 100,000 people of  Tyre district, villages below the Litani river,  have no ambulance tranport to reach hospital.
Revised:  This means that 100,000 people of the Tyre district, villages below the Litani river, have no ambulance tranport to reach hospital.
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Original:  This means that 100,000 people of  Tyre district, villages below the Litani river,  have no ambulance tranport to reach hospital.
Revised:  This means that 100,000 people of Tyre district, villages below the Litani river, would have no ambulance tranport to reach hospital.
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Original:  Red Cross volunteer Mr Shaalan says although this is the first time ambulances have been hit by Israel in this war  it was only a matter of time.
Revised:  Red Cross volunteer Mr Shaalan says although this is the first time ambulances have been hit by Israel in this war , it was only a matter of time.
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Original:  The Australian, with  correspondent in Tyre, claim at least 10 Lebanese ambulances bearing the International Red Cross emblem have been targeted in Israeli air strikes in the south  Lebanon that have killed more than a dozen civilian passengers on transport to hospitals.
Revised:  The Australian, with a correspondent in Tyre, claim at least 10 Lebanese ambulances bearing the International Red Cross emblem have been targeted in Israeli air strikes in the south Lebanon that have killed more than a dozen civilian passengers on transport to hospitals.
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Original:  The Australian, with  correspondent in Tyre, claim at least 10 Lebanese ambulances bearing the International Red Cross emblem have been targeted in Israeli air strikes in the south  Lebanon that have killed more than a dozen civilian passengers on transport to hospitals.
Revised:  The Australian, with correspondent in Tyre, claims at least 10 Lebanese ambulances bearing the International Red Cross emblem have been targeted in Israeli air strikes in the south Lebanon that have killed more than a dozen civilian passengers on transport to hospitals.
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Original:  The Australian, with  correspondent in Tyre, claim at least 10 Lebanese ambulances bearing the International Red Cross emblem have been targeted in Israeli air strikes in the south  Lebanon that have killed more than a dozen civilian passengers on transport to hospitals.
Revised:  The Australian, with correspondent in Tyre, claim at least 10 Lebanese ambulances bearing the International Red Cross emblem have been targeted in Israeli air strikes in the south of Lebanon that have killed more than a dozen civilian passengers on transport to hospitals.
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Original: pov Six ambulance workers and their patients were wounded when Israeli missiles struck Red Cross ambulances on a rescue mission in south Lebanon.
Revised:  Six ambulance workers and their patients were wounded when Israeli missiles struck Red Cross ambulances on a rescue mission in south Lebanon.
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Original:  Now the son is losing his leg and the other is treated for shrapnel wonds .
Revised:  Now the son is losing his leg and the other is treated for shrapnel wounds .
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Original:  This means that 100,000 people of the Tyre district, villages below the Litani river, would have no ambulance transport to reach hospital.  }} 
Revised:  This means that 100,000 people of the Tyre district, villages below the Litani river, would have no ambulance transport to reach hospital. }} -
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Original:  In 2004 the United Nations acknowledged that armed Palestinian militants had hijacked a neutrally marked ambulance, and called on all parties to respect the neutrality of its ambulances. cite URL + The Lebanese Red Cross demanded that Israel guarantee their safety through the United Nations or the International Red Cross or they would cease all rescue missions.
Revised:  cite URL + The Lebanese Red Cross demanded that Israel guarantee their safety through the United Nations or the International Red Cross or they would cease all rescue missions.
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Original:  This means that 100,000 people of the Tyre district, villages below the Litani river, would have no ambulance transport to reach hospital. - |title=UN ambulance hijacked by armed Palestinians - |author=UNRWA Press Statement - |pub=UNRWA - |date=May 13, 2004%DIFDELCMD < }} %DIFDELCMD < %%% -
Revised:  This means that 100,000 people of the Tyre district, villages below the Litani river, would have no ambulance transport to reach hospital. - |title=UN ambulance hijacked by armed Palestinians - |author=UNRWA Press Statement - |pub=UNRWA - |date=May 13, 2004%DIFDELCMD < }} %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: The most recent rendition of the Elmwood Village Hotel.
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