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Original: President Obama accepted McChrystal's resignation at the release of the article, stating the conduct presented in the article “ does not meet the standard that should be set by a commanding general ”.
Revised: President Obama accepted McChrystal's resignation at the release of the article, stating the conduct presented in the article “ does not meet the standard that should be set by a commanding general ."
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Original:  According to the report, the first McChrystal knew of the comments was when he read the Rolling Stone article.
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Original:  Hastings and Rolling Stone editors maintain  the article is truthful, with executive editor Eric Bates stating the article is "accurate in every detail."
Revised:  Hastings and Rolling Stone editors maintain that the article is truthful, with executive editor Eric Bates stating the article is "accurate in every detail."
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Original:  The Rolling Stone article by Michael Hastings , published on June 22, 2010, quoted one of McChrystal’s military aides giving Vice President the nickname "Bite me" and another aide referring to General James L. Jones as "a clown." President Obama accepted McChrystal's resignation at the release of the article, stating the conduct presented in the article "does not meet the standard that should be set by a commanding general."
Revised:  The Rolling Stone article by , published on June 22, 2010, quoted one of McChrystal’s military aides giving Vice President the nickname "Bite me" and another aide referring to General James L. Jones as "a clown." President Obama accepted McChrystal's resignation at the release of the article, stating the conduct presented in the article "does not meet the standard that should be set by a commanding general."
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Original:  The Rolling Stone article by Michael Hastings , published on June 22, 2010, quoted one of McChrystal’s military aides giving Vice President the nickname "Bite me" and another aide referring to General James L. Jones as "a clown." President Obama accepted McChrystal's resignation at the release of the article, stating the conduct presented in the article "does not meet the standard that should be set by a commanding general."
Revised:  The Rolling Stone article by Michael Hastings , published on June 22, 2010, quoted one of McChrystal’s military aides giving Vice President the nickname "Bite me" and another aide referring to General as "a clown." President Obama accepted McChrystal's resignation at the release of the article, stating the conduct presented in the article "does not meet the standard that should be set by a commanding general."
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Original:  The Rolling Stone article by Michael Hastings , published on June 22, 2010, quoted one of McChrystal’s military aides giving Vice President the nickname "Bite me" and another aide referring to General James L. Jones as "a clown." President Obama accepted McChrystal's resignation at the release of the article, stating the conduct presented in the article "does not meet the standard that should be set by a commanding general."
Revised:  The Rolling Stone article by Michael Hastings , published on June 22, 2010, quoted one of McChrystal’s military aides giving Vice President the nickname "Bite me" and another aide referring to General James L. Jones as "a clown." President accepted McChrystal's resignation at the release of the article, stating the conduct presented in the article "does not meet the standard that should be set by a commanding general."
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Original:  The 220 million euro (260 million dollar ) probe is set to examine the turbulent atmosphere and intense greenhouse effect of Venus.
Revised:  The 220 million € (260 million dollar ) probe is set to examine the turbulent atmosphere and intense greenhouse effect of Venus.
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Original:  The 220 million euro (260 million dollar ) probe is set to examine the turbulent atmosphere and intense greenhouse effect of Venus.
Revised:  The 220 million euro (260 million US ) probe is set to examine the turbulent atmosphere and intense greenhouse effect of Venus.
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Original: Venus Express probe  European Space Agency's probe to Venus was successfully launched on Wednesday, November 9, at 0333 GMT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan.
Revised: Venus Express probe The European Space Agency's probe to Venus was successfully launched on Wednesday, November 9, at 0333 GMT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan.
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Original:  Venus Express is to arrive at Venus in April 2006.
Revised:  Venus Express is to arrive at its destination in April 2006.
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Original:  The 220 million € (260 million US$) probe is set to examine the turbulent atmosphere and intense greenhouse effect of Venus .
Revised:  The 220 million € (260 million US$) probe is set to study Venus' turbulent atmosphere and intense greenhouse effect of Venus .
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Original:  The 220 million € (260 million US$) probe is set to examine the turbulent atmosphere and intense greenhouse effect of Venus .
Revised:  The 220 million € (260 million US$) probe is set to examine the turbulent atmosphere and intense greenhouse effect atmosphere .
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Original:  It is hoped that the results will help scientists understand Earth's global warming better.
Revised:  It is hoped that the results will help scientists understand the global warming on the earth better.
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Original:  Venus express is a clone of Mars Express  which has been orbiting Mars since December 2003
Revised:  Venus express is a clone of Mars Express , which has been orbiting Mars since December 2003
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Original: The 220 million € (260 million US$) probe is set to study Venus' turbulent atmosphere and intense greenhouse effect atmosphere.
Revised: The 220 million € (260 million US$) probe is set to study Venus' turbulent and intense greenhouse effect atmosphere.
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Original:  The probe, entitled Venus Express, separated from its Soyuz Fregat carrier 90 minutes after the launch, after which it emitted a signal marking the start of its journey to Earth's closest planetary neighbour.
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Original:  The 220 million € (260 million US$) probe is set to study Venus' turbulent and intense greenhouse effect atmosphere .
Revised:  The 220 million € (260 million US$) probe is going to study Venus' turbulent and intense greenhouse effect atmosphere .
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Original: Venus Express probe The ESA ( European Space Agency )launched the Venus Express on Wednesday, November 9, at 0333 GMT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan.
Revised: Venus Express probe European Space Agency )launched the Venus Express on Wednesday, November 9, at 0333 GMT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan.
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Original: Venus Express probe The ESA ( European Space Agency )launched the Venus Express on Wednesday, November 9, at 0333 GMT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan.
Revised: Venus Express probe The ESA ( European Space Agency 's probe to Venus was successfully launched on Wednesday, November 9, at 0333 GMT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan.
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Original: Venus Express probe European Space Agency's probe to Venus was successfully launched on Wednesday, November 9, at 0333 GMT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan.
Revised:  European Space Agency's probe to Venus was successfully launched on Wednesday, November 9, at 0333 GMT from the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan.
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Original: Unrest continues in Syria as security forces allegedly opened fire on 10  000 anti-government protestors in the city of Homs on Monday night , reportedly injuring two .
Revised: Unrest continues in as security forces allegedly opened fire on 10 000 anti-government protestors in the city of Homs on Monday night , reportedly injuring two .
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Original: Unrest continues in Syria as security forces allegedly opened fire on 10  000 anti-government protestors in the city of Homs on Monday night , reportedly injuring two .
Revised: Unrest continues in Syria as security forces allegedly opened fire on 10 , 000 anti-government protestors in the city of Homs on Monday night , reportedly injuring two .
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Original: Unrest continues in Syria as security forces allegedly opened fire on 10  000 anti-government protestors in the city of Homs on Monday night , reportedly injuring two .
Revised: Unrest continues in Syria as security forces allegedly opened fire on 10 000 anti-government protestors in the city of Homs on Monday night ; two were reported as injured .
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Original:  The protest, allegedly sparked by the funerals of 17 anti-government protestors held earlier in the day, resulted in security forces a locking-down the city and ordering protestors to disband by 2:30am.
Revised:  The protest, sparked by the funerals of 17 anti-government protestors held earlier in the day, resulted in security forces a locking-down the city and ordering protestors to disband by 2:30am.
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Original:  The protest, allegedly sparked by the funerals of 17 anti-government protestors held earlier in the day, resulted in security forces a locking-down the city and ordering protestors to disband by 2:30am.
Revised:  The protest, allegedly sparked by the funerals of seventeen anti-government protestors held earlier in the day, resulted in security forces a locking-down the city and ordering protestors to disband by 2:30am.
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Original:  The protest, allegedly sparked by the funerals of 17 anti-government protestors held earlier in the day, resulted in security forces a locking-down the city and ordering protestors to disband by 2:30am.
Revised:  The protest, allegedly sparked by the funerals of 17 anti-government protestors held earlier in the day, resulted in security forces locking-down the city and ordering protestors to disband by 2:30am.
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Original:  This is the latest in a spate of unrest in the country and the largest protest seen in Homs, Syria ’ s third largest city, since the unrest began a little over a month ago and comes despite an announcement from President Bashar al-Assad on Saturday promising the removal of Syria’s decade-long emergency laws within a week.
Revised:  This is the latest in a spate of unrest in the country and the largest protest seen in Homs, Syria ' s third largest city, since the unrest began a little over a month ago and comes despite an announcement from President Bashar al-Assad on Saturday promising the removal of Syria’s decade-long emergency laws within a week.
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Original:  This is the latest in a spate of unrest in the country and the largest protest seen in Homs, Syria ’ s third largest city, since the unrest began a little over a month ago and comes despite an announcement from President Bashar al-Assad on Saturday promising the removal of Syria’s decade-long emergency laws within a week.
Revised:  This is the latest in a spate of unrest in the country and the largest protest seen in Homs, Syria ’ s third largest city, since the unrest began a little over a month ago and comes despite an announcement from President on Saturday promising the removal of Syria’s decade-long emergency laws within a week.
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Original:  In light of the recent deaths one activist, calling himself Abu Haider, indicated to Al Jazeera that the protestors ’ objective had changed from reform to regime change.
Revised:  In light of the recent deaths one activist, calling himself Abu Haider, indicated to that the protestors ’ objective had changed from reform to regime change.
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Original:  In light of the recent deaths one activist, calling himself Abu Haider, indicated to Al Jazeera that the protestors ’ objective had changed from reform to regime change.
Revised:  In light of the recent deaths one activist, calling himself Abu Haider, indicated to Al Jazeera that the protestors ' objective had changed from reform to regime change.
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Original:  Foreign minister Walid al-Muallem claims that the reform process is underway and while peaceful protest will be tolerated, disruptive or violent actions will not
Revised:  Foreign minister claims that the reform process is underway and while peaceful protest will be tolerated, disruptive or violent actions will not
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Original:  Security forces allegedly opened fire at 2: 15am , also using tear-gas to subdue the crowd.
Revised:  Security forces allegedly opened fire at 2: 15 a.m. , also using tear-gas to subdue the crowd.
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Original:  Security forces allegedly opened fire at 2: 15am , also using tear-gas to subdue the crowd.
Revised:  Security forces allegedly opened fire at 2: 15am , also using tear gas to subdue the crowd.
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Original:  This is the latest in a spate of unrest in the country and the largest protest seen in Homs, Syria's third largest city, since the unrest began a little over a month ago and comes despite an announcement from  President on Saturday promising the removal of Syria’ s decade-long emergency laws within a week.
Revised:  This is the latest in a spate of unrest in the country and the largest protest seen in Homs, Syria's third largest city, since the unrest began a little over a month ago and comes despite an announcement from Syrian President on Saturday promising the removal of Syria’ s decade-long emergency laws within a week.
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Original:  This is the latest in a spate of unrest in the country and the largest protest seen in Homs, Syria's third largest city, since the unrest began a little over a month ago and comes despite an announcement from  President on Saturday promising the removal of Syria’ s decade-long emergency laws within a week.
Revised:  This is the latest in a spate of unrest in the country and the largest protest seen in Homs, Syria's third largest city, since the unrest began a little over a month ago and comes despite an announcement from President on Saturday promising the removal of this country' s decade-long emergency laws within a week.
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Original:  In light of the recent deaths  one activist, calling himself Abu Haider, indicated to that the protestors' objective had changed from reform to regime change.
Revised:  In light of the recent deaths , one activist, calling himself Abu Haider, indicated to that the protestors' objective had changed from reform to regime change.
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Original: Thousands of protesters were demonstrating today in Baku, the capitol of Azerbaijan.
Revised: Thousands of protesters were demonstrating today in Baku, the capital of Azerbaijan.
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Original:  Many people were were stopped by police, while they had been going to outskirts to Baku.
Revised:  Many people were stopped by police, while they had been going to outskirts to Baku.
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Original:  Many people were were stopped by police, while they had been going to outskirts to Baku.
Revised:  Many people were were stopped by police, while they had been going to outskirts of Baku.
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Original:  November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by governing New Azerbaijan Party, were conmned by international organisations, such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
Revised:  November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by governing New Azerbaijan Party, were condemned by international organisations, such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
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Original: Thousands of protesters were demonstrating today in Baku, the capital of Azerbaijan.
Revised: Thousands of protestors demonstrated today in Baku, the capital of Azerbaijan.
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Original:  They left their houses , because they are unrested by the results of Novemer 6 parliamentary elections, which, according to the opposistion , are faked.
Revised:  They left their houses due to unrest over the results of Novemer 6 parliamentary elections, which, according to the opposistion , are faked.
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Original:  They left their houses , because they are unrested by the results of Novemer 6 parliamentary elections, which, according to the opposistion , are faked.
Revised:  They left their houses , because they are unrested by the results of the November 6 parliamentary elections, which, according to the opposistion , are faked.
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Original:  They left their houses , because they are unrested by the results of Novemer 6 parliamentary elections, which, according to the opposistion , are faked.
Revised:  They left their houses , because they are unrested by the results of Novemer 6 parliamentary elections, which, according to the opposition , are faked.
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Original:  The protest lasted about three hours , as it hadn't been allowed to outlast any time more .
Revised:  The protest lasted about three hours before being shut down .
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Original:  The protest gathered some 15,000 people, but  opposition hoped to gather 30,000 to 50,000 Azeris.
Revised:  The protest gathered some 15,000 people, but the opposition hoped to gather 30,000 to 50,000 Azeris.
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Original:  Many people were stopped by police , while they had been going to outskirts of Baku.
Revised:  Many people were stopped by police on their way to the outskirts of Baku.
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Original:  Main demonstration took place at Gelebe Square.
Revised:  The main demonstration took place at Gelebe Square.
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Original:  Whenever rioters wanted to spread out the protest, police had been using the force to stop them.
Revised:  When rioters tried to enlarge the protest, police had been using the force to stop them.
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Original:  Whenever rioters wanted to spread out the protest, police had been using the force to stop them.
Revised:  Whenever rioters wanted to spread out the protest, police used force to stop them.
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Original:  They trust that the demonstration was controlled by the goverment.
Revised:  They believe that the demonstration was controlled by the goverment.
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Original:   November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by  governing New Azerbaijan Party, were condemned by international organisations , such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
Revised:  The November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by governing New Azerbaijan Party, were condemned by international organisations , such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
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Original:   November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by  governing New Azerbaijan Party, were condemned by international organisations , such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
Revised:  November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by the governing New Azerbaijan Party, were condemned by international organisations , such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
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Original:   November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by  governing New Azerbaijan Party, were condemned by international organisations , such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
Revised:  November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by governing New Azerbaijan Party, have been condemned by international organisations , such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
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Original:   November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by  governing New Azerbaijan Party, were condemned by international organisations , such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
Revised:  November 6 elections, won, according to officials, by governing New Azerbaijan Party, were condemned by international organizations , such as The Organization for Security and Co-operation in Europe, and by independent observers.
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Original:   Council of Europe reports that results in about 43\%  polling stations were faked.
Revised:  The Council of Europe reports that results in about 43\% polling stations were faked.
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Original:   Council of Europe reports that results in about 43\%  polling stations were faked.
Revised:  Council of Europe reports that results in about 43\% of polling stations were faked.
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Original: Thousands of protestors demonstrated today in Baku, the capital of Azerbaijan .
Revised: Thousands of protestors demonstrated today in Baku, the capital of pez .
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Original: Thousands of protestors demonstrated today in Baku, the capital of pez .
Revised: Thousands of protestors demonstrated today in Baku, the capital of Azerbaijan .
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Original: City center of Amman At least three explosions hit US-owned hotels in Amman this evening, killing at least 98 people and wounding at least 245 others.
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Original:  Jordanian King Abdullah II has condemned the bombings and announced that "justice will pursue the criminals".
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Original: City center of Amman At least three explosions hit US-owned hotels in Amman this evening, killing at least 57 people and wounding at least 245 others.
Revised: City center of Amman At least three explosions hit US-owned hotels in this evening, killing at least 57 people and wounding at least 245 others.
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Original:  The first of the apparently coordinated suicide bombings occurred at 8.50 pm (1850 UTC) at the Grand Hyatt hotel in the Jordanian capital.
Revised:  The first of the apparently coordinated suicide bombings occurred at 8.50 pm (1850 UTC) at the hotel in the Jordanian capital.
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Original:  It was followed by explosions at the Radisson SAS and the Days Inn .
Revised:  It was followed by explosions at the SAS and the Days Inn .
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Original:  It was followed by explosions at the Radisson SAS and the Days Inn .
Revised:  It was followed by explosions at the Radisson SAS and the .
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Original:  Islamic fundamentalist group Al-Qaeda , led by militant Abu Musab al-Zarqawi , is said to have claimed responsibility for the attacks on their website.
Revised:  group , led by militant Abu Musab al-Zarqawi , is said to have claimed responsibility for the attacks on their website.
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Original:  Islamic fundamentalist group Al-Qaeda , led by militant Abu Musab al-Zarqawi , is said to have claimed responsibility for the attacks on their website.
Revised:  Islamic fundamentalist group Al-Qaeda , led by militant , is said to have claimed responsibility for the attacks on their website.
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Original:  Paulina Constanza Tapia Figueroa, 25, a surfer native to Pichilemu, known worldwide as the "Surf Capital", died drowned on Monday, in beach, about seven kilometers south of the city.
Revised:  Paulina Constanza Tapia Figueroa, 25, a surfer native to Pichilemu, known worldwide as the "Surf Capital", died on Monday, in beach, about seven kilometers south of the city.
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Original:  Paulina Constanza Tapia Figueroa, 25, a surfer native to Pichilemu, known worldwide as the "Surf Capital", died drowned on Monday, in beach, about seven kilometers south of the city.
Revised:  Paulina Constanza Tapia Figueroa, 25, a surfer native to Pichilemu, known worldwide as the "Surf Capital", died drowned on Monday, at beach, about seven kilometers south of the city.
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