wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Mullera Poovayya Ganesh (born 8 July 1946) is a former Indian professional field hockey player.
Revised: Mollera Poovayya Ganesh (born 8 July 1946) is a former Indian professional field hockey player.
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Original: References Sources Meisenheimer, Lucky J. (1999).
Revised:  Sources Meisenheimer, Lucky J. (1999).
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Original: Early history Pedro Flores was born in Vintar, Ilocos Norte, Philippines and came to the United States in 1915.
Revised: Early history 77Pedro Flores was born in Vintar, Ilocos Norte, Philippines and came to the United States in 1915.
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Original: Early history 77Pedro Flores was born in Vintar, Ilocos Norte, Philippines and came to the United States in 1915.
Revised: Early history Pedro Flores was born in Vintar, Ilocos Norte, Philippines and came to the United States in 1915.
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Original:   An example by Rembrandt can be found in his work, Flora , which resides in the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York  {cite web URL |title= Rembrandt (Rembrandt van Rijn)'
Revised:  An example by Rembrandt can be found in his Flora in the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York {cite web URL |title= Rembrandt (Rembrandt van Rijn)'
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Original:   An example by Rembrandt can be found in his work, Flora , which resides in the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York  {cite web URL |title= Rembrandt (Rembrandt van Rijn)'
Revised:  An example by Rembrandt can be found in his work, Flora , which resides in the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York . {cite web URL |title= Rembrandt (Rembrandt van Rijn)'
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Original:  The painting which depicts the Roman goddess of spring, thought to be based on his deceased wife Saskia,  has elements of pentimento .
Revised:  The painting which depicts the Roman goddess of spring, thought to be modelled on his deceased wife Saskia, has elements of pentimento .
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Original:  The painting which depicts the Roman goddess of spring, thought to be based on his deceased wife Saskia,  has elements of pentimento .
Revised:  The painting which depicts the Roman goddess of spring, thought to be based on his deceased wife Saskia, and has elements of pentimento .
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Original:  This can be seen in relation to a double hat brim that the artist attempted to overpaint .
Revised:  This can be seen in relation to a double hat brim where the artist overpainted .
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Original: Flora' |author= |website= Metropolitan Museum of Art |access-date=22 September 2020}} File:Rembrandt Harmensz. van Rijn 059.jpg|the painting ;
Revised: Flora' |author= |website= Metropolitan Museum of Art |access-date=22 September 2020}} the painting ;
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Original: In statistics, quality assurance, and survey methodology , sampling is the selection of a subset (a statistical sample) of individuals from within a statistical population to estimate characteristics of the whole population.
Revised: In statistics, quality assurance, and survey methodology 
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Original:  Thus for example, a simple random sample of individuals in the United Kingdom might  include some in remote Scottish islands who would be inordinately expensive to sample.
Revised:  Thus for example, a simple random sample of individuals in the United Kingdom might not include some in remote Scottish islands who would be inordinately expensive to sample.
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Original:  Statisticians attempt for the samples to represent the population in question.
Revised:  Statisticians attempt to collect samples that are representative of the population in question.
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Original:  Two advantages of sampling are lower cost and faster data collection than measuring the entire population  . Each observation measures one or more properties (such as weight, location, colour) of observable bodies distinguished as independent objects or individuals.
Revised:  Sampling has lower costs and faster data collection than measuring the entire population . Each observation measures one or more properties (such as weight, location, colour) of observable bodies distinguished as independent objects or individuals.
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Original:  Two advantages of sampling are lower cost and faster data collection than measuring the entire population  . Each observation measures one or more properties (such as weight, location, colour) of observable bodies distinguished as independent objects or individuals.
Revised:  Two advantages of sampling are lower cost and faster data collection than measuring the entire population . Each observation measures one or more properties (such as weight, location, colour) of independent objects or individuals.
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Original:  For instance, a simple random sample of ten people from a given country will on average produce five men and five women, but any given trial is likely to overrepresent one sex and underrepresent the other.
Revised:  For instance, a simple random sample of ten people from a given country will on average produce five men and five women, but any given trial is likely to over represent one sex and underrepresent the other.
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Original: A research study done by Robert Johnson and Gregory Tweedieapplying direct Phonemic Awareness (PA) instruction to young English as a Foreign Language (EFL) learners in rural Malaysia showed that those children educated by PA achieved significantly greater test scores than the control group.
Revised: A research study done by Robert Johnson and Gregory Tweedieapplying direct Phonemic Awareness (PA) instruction to young English as a Foreign Language (EFL) learners in rural Malaysia . Those children given direct PA instruction achieved significantly greater test scores than the control group.
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Original: A research study done by Robert Johnson and Gregory Tweedieapplying direct Phonemic Awareness (PA) instruction to young English as a Foreign Language (EFL) learners in rural Malaysia showed that those children educated by PA achieved significantly greater test scores than the control group.
Revised: A research study done by Robert Johnson and Gregory Tweedieapplying direct Phonemic Awareness (PA) instruction to young English as a Foreign Language (EFL) learners in rural Malaysia showed that those children educated by PA achieved significantly greater test scores than a control group.
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Original:  Later, another study with the same PA instruction approach was conducted on Arabic adult  English Language Learners ( ELL) in a Nursing English for Academic Proposes program showed the same positive result.
Revised:  Later, another study with the same PA instruction approach was conducted on Arabic adult Adult English Language Learners ( ELL) in a Nursing English for Academic Proposes program showed the same positive result.
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Original:  Despite the substantial gains in vowel recognition , a downside of using PA , not in this study, is that adult ELLs may negatively perceive PA  as a "childish" approach.
Revised:  Despite the substantial gains in vowel recognition , a downside of using PA , not in this study, is that adult ELLs may negatively perceive PA instruction as a "childish" approach.
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Original:  These are more complex but research supports the use of the three listed above, particularly oral segmenting and oral blending     .
Revised:  These are more complex but research supports the use of the three listed above, particularly oral segmenting and oral blending . .
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Original: Phonemic awareness is a subset of phonological awareness in which listeners are able to hear, identify and manipulate phonemes, the smallest mental units of sound that helps to differentiate units of meaning (morphemes).
Revised: Phonemic awareness is a subset of phonological awareness in which listeners are able to hear, identify and manipulate phonemes, the smallest mental units of sound that help to differentiate units of meaning (morphemes).
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Original:  However, phonemes could not be separated like notes in a song or could be identified in isolation.
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Original:  The National Reading Panel has found that phonemic awareness improves children's word reading and reading comprehension , as well as helping children learn to spell.
Revised:  The National Reading Panel has found that phonemic awareness improves children's word reading and reading comprehension and helps children learn to spell.
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Original: Phonemic awareness (PA) instruction has been shown to support English as a Second or Foreign Language learning.
Revised: Phonemic awareness (PA) instruction has been shown to support English as a second language and foreign language learning.
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Original:  Johnson and Tweedie's (2010) study applied direct Phonemic Awareness (PA) instruction to young English as a Foreign Language (EFL) learners in rural Malaysia.
Revised:  Johnson and Tweedie's (2010) study applied direct phonemic awareness (PA) instruction to young English as a Foreign Language (EFL) learners in rural Malaysia.
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Original:  Johnson and Tweedie's (2010) study applied direct Phonemic Awareness (PA) instruction to young English as a Foreign Language (EFL) learners in rural Malaysia.
Revised:  Johnson and Tweedie's (2010) study applied direct Phonemic Awareness (PA) instruction to young English as a foreign language (EFL) learners in rural Malaysia.
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Original:  Adult English Language Learners (ELLs) may also benefit from direct PA instruction.
Revised:  Adult English language learners (ELLs) may also benefit from direct PA instruction.
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Original: Phonological awareness refers to an individual's awareness of the phonological structure, or sound structure, of words.
Revised: Phonological awareness is an individual's awareness of the phonological structure, or sound structure, of words.
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Original:  It should be noted that the acquisition of phonological awareness skills does not progress in a linear sequence;
Revised:  The acquisition of phonological awareness skills does not progress in a linear sequence;
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Original:  Spoken rhyme generation: e.g., "Tell me words that rhyme with bell ? " Onset-rime blending
Revised:  Spoken rhyme generation: e.g., "Tell me words that rhyme with bell . " Onset-rime blending
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Original:  On an 18 May  visit to Kibuye Prefecture, he congratulated the people on how well they had done their "work".
Revised:  On 18 May visit to Kibuye Prefecture, he congratulated the people on how well they had done their "work".
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Original:  On an 18 May  visit to Kibuye Prefecture, he congratulated the people on how well they had done their "work".
Revised:  On an 18 May , whilst on a visit to Kibuye Prefecture, he congratulated the people on how well they had done their "work".
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Original:  Following the invasion of the Rwandese Patriotic Front that took control of the country and ended the genocide, Sindikubwabo fled to Zaire (now the Democratic Republic of the Congo), where he lived in exile in Bukavu.
Revised:  Following the invasion of the Rwandan Patriotic Front that took control of the country and ended the genocide, Sindikubwabo fled to Zaire (now the Democratic Republic of the Congo), where he lived in exile in Bukavu.
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Original: Théodore Sindikubwabo was born in Zivu,Shyanda village in the town of Butare formerly called Astrida in Rwanda-Urundi Territory,  currently the southern province of Rwanda ,from Tutsi parents ( Zacharrie SEMUTWA and Judithe NYIRAMANDWA ) . Sindikubwabo was educated as a physician and was Minister of Health in the administration of President Kayibanda.
Revised: Théodore Sindikubwabo was born in Zivu,Shyanda village in the town of Butare formerly called Astrida in Rwanda-Urundi Territory, and currently the southern province of Rwanda ,from Tutsi parents ( Zacharrie SEMUTWA and Judithe NYIRAMANDWA ) . Sindikubwabo was educated as a physician and was Minister of Health in the administration of President Kayibanda.
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Original: Théodore Sindikubwabo was born in Zivu,Shyanda village in the town of Butare formerly called Astrida in Rwanda-Urundi Territory,  currently the southern province of Rwanda ,from Tutsi parents ( Zacharrie SEMUTWA and Judithe NYIRAMANDWA ) . Sindikubwabo was educated as a physician and was Minister of Health in the administration of President Kayibanda.
Revised: Théodore Sindikubwabo was born in Zivu,Shyanda village in the town of Butare formerly called Astrida in Rwanda-Urundi Territory, currently the southern province of Rwanda . His parents Zacharrie SEMUTWA and Judithe NYIRAMANDWA ) . Sindikubwabo was educated as a physician and was Minister of Health in the administration of President Kayibanda.
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Original: Théodore Sindikubwabo was born in Zivu,Shyanda village in the town of Butare formerly called Astrida in Rwanda-Urundi Territory,  currently the southern province of Rwanda ,from Tutsi parents ( Zacharrie SEMUTWA and Judithe NYIRAMANDWA ) . Sindikubwabo was educated as a physician and was Minister of Health in the administration of President Kayibanda.
Revised: Théodore Sindikubwabo was born in Zivu,Shyanda village in the town of Butare formerly called Astrida in Rwanda-Urundi Territory, currently the southern province of Rwanda ,from Tutsi parents ( Zacharrie SEMUTWA and Judithe NYIRAMANDWA were both from Tutsi ethnic group . Sindikubwabo was educated as a physician and was Minister of Health in the administration of President Kayibanda.
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Original: Théodore Sindikubwabo ( 1928 – March 1998 ) was the interim President of Rwanda during the Rwandan genocide, from April 9 to July 19, 1994.
Revised: Théodore Sindikubwabo ( 1929 – March 1998 ) was the interim President of Rwanda during the Rwandan genocide, from April 9 to July 19, 1994.
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Original:  Category: 1928 births Category: 1998 deaths Category:Genocide perpetrators Category:Hutu people Category:People of the Rwandan genocide Category:Government ministers of Rwanda Category:Members of the Parliament of Rwanda Category:Rwandan exiles Category:Rwandan expatriates in the Democratic Republic of the Congo Category:People from Buta
Revised:  Category: 1929 births Category: 1998 deaths Category:Genocide perpetrators Category:Hutu people Category:People of the Rwandan genocide Category:Government ministers of Rwanda Category:Members of the Parliament of Rwanda Category:Rwandan exiles Category:Rwandan expatriates in the Democratic Republic of the Congo Category:People from Buta
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Original:  Category: 1928 births Category: 1998 deaths Category:Genocide perpetrators Category:Hutu people Category:People of the Rwandan genocide Category:Government ministers of Rwanda Category:Members of the Parliament of Rwanda Category:Rwandan exiles Category:Rwandan expatriates in the Democratic Republic of the Congo Category:People from Buta
Revised:  Category: 1928 births Category: 1997 deaths Category:Genocide perpetrators Category:Hutu people Category:People of the Rwandan genocide Category:Government ministers of Rwanda Category:Members of the Parliament of Rwanda Category:Rwandan exiles Category:Rwandan expatriates in the Democratic Republic of the Congo Category:People from Buta
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Original: Théodore Sindikubwabo ( 1929 – March 1997 ) was the interim President of Rwanda during the Rwandan genocide, from April 9 to July 19, 1994.
Revised: Théodore Sindikubwabo ( 1928 – March 1997 ) was the interim President of Rwanda during the Rwandan genocide, from April 9 to July 19, 1994.
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Original: Théodore Sindikubwabo ( 1929 – March 1997 ) was the interim President of Rwanda during the Rwandan genocide, from April 9 to July 19, 1994.
Revised: Théodore Sindikubwabo ( 1929 – March 1998 ) was the interim President of Rwanda during the Rwandan genocide, from April 9 to July 19, 1994.
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Original:  Category: 1929 births Category: 1997 deaths Category:Genocide perpetrators Category:Hutu people Category:People of the Rwandan genocide Category:Government ministers of Rwanda Category:Members of the Parliament of Rwanda Category:Rwandan exiles Category:Rwandan expatriates in the Democratic Republic of the Congo Category:People from Buta
Revised:  Category: 1928 births Category: 1997 deaths Category:Genocide perpetrators Category:Hutu people Category:People of the Rwandan genocide Category:Government ministers of Rwanda Category:Members of the Parliament of Rwanda Category:Rwandan exiles Category:Rwandan expatriates in the Democratic Republic of the Congo Category:People from Buta
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Original: Colonial governors Lieutenant Governors (1919–1932) Édouard Hesling (9 November 1919 –
Revised:  Lieutenant Governors (1919–1932) Édouard Hesling (9 November 1919 –
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Original:  29 April 1948), acting Albert Mouragues (29 April 1948 – 23 February 1953) Salvador Jean Étcheber (23 February 1953 – 3 November 1956) Yvon Bourges (3 November 1956 – 15 July 1958) Max Berthet (15 July 1958 – 11 December 1958), acting High Commissioners (1958–1960) Max Berthet (11 December 1958 – February 1959) Paul Masson (February 1959 – 5 August 1960) People born in French Upper Volta Norbert Zong
Revised:  29 April 1948), acting Albert Mouragues (29 April 1948 – 23 February 1953) Salvador Jean Étcheber (23 February 1953 – 3 November 1956) Yvon Bourges (3 November 1956 – 15 July 1958) Max Berthet (15 July 1958 – 11 December 1958), acting People born in French Upper Volta Norbert Zong
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Original:  In other words, the essentials for covering the region. -- Peter Munckton, ABC correspondent who covered the Vietnam War news.
Revised:  In other words, the essentials for covering the region. — Peter Munckton, ABC correspondent who covered the Vietnam War news.
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Original:  Here you had a gifted cinematographer with a keen eye for news, steeped in the history of his working environment and all its sensitivities, willingly moulding and protecting a string of young, ambitious Australians on their foreign assignments. -- Paul Lockyer, ABC correspondent.
Revised:  Here you had a gifted cinematographer with a keen eye for news, steeped in the history of his working environment and all its sensitivities, willingly moulding and protecting a string of young, ambitious Australians on their foreign assignments. — Paul Lockyer, ABC correspondent.
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Original:  On the morning of December 8 , 1941, a bomb whistled down and crashed into a well near the servants ’ quarters in the League of Nations compound off River Valley Road where Phua lived.
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Original:  On the morning of December 8 , 1941, a bomb whistled down and crashed into a well near the servants ’ quarters in the League of Nations compound off River Valley Road where Phua lived.
Revised:  On the morning of December 8 , 1941, a bomb whistled down and crashed into a well near the servants ' quarters in the League of Nations compound off River Valley Road where Phua lived.
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Original:  Japan ’ s war had come to Singapore.
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Original: 'Capturing Asia', pp 1-3 & 14-34.
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Original: 'Capturing Asia', pp 1-3 & 14-34.
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Original:  When the women had a Japanese client, especially if they had found a captain or a higher rank, they would say ‘I’m hungry’ and ask the soldiers to buy noodles for them." 'Capturing Asia', pp 31-34 In 1971 he filmed Pakistani Army killings during the birth of the new state of Bangladesh, then East Pakistan.
Revised:  When the women had a Japanese client, especially if they had found a captain or a higher rank, they would say ‘I’m hungry’ and ask the soldiers to buy noodles for them." 'Capturing Asia', pp 31–34 In 1971 he filmed Pakistani Army killings during the birth of the new state of Bangladesh, then East Pakistan.
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Original:  Phua ’ s then correspondent on the assignment, Australian Don Hook, remembers: "From the roof of the Inter-Continental Hotel in Dacca, Phua shot graphic film of horrific events in the street below.
Revised:  Phua ' s then correspondent on the assignment, Australian Don Hook, remembers: "From the roof of the Inter-Continental Hotel in Dacca, Phua shot graphic film of horrific events in the street below.
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Original: Don Hook & Phua in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 120-132 Phua had seven lengthy assignments to cover the Vietnam war during 1971 and 1972.
Revised: Don Hook & Phua in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 120–132 Phua had seven lengthy assignments to cover the Vietnam war during 1971 and 1972.
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Original: Visnews manager Juliette Suong & Phua in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 156-175.
Revised: Visnews manager Juliette Suong & Phua in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 156–175.
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Original:  Phua in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 265-270 ;
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Original: Former ABC correspondent Peter Munckton, head Network Australia Bruce Dover & Joseph Madan in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 272-281.
Revised: Former ABC correspondent Peter Munckton, head Network Australia Bruce Dover & Joseph Madan in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 272–281.
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Original:  Eastley & Phua in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 325-344.
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Original:  For instance, he recalled, Phua spent much of his time getting access to a block of flats in order to get a good elevated shot of the prison in order to cover the news of the hanging of two Australian traffickers in Kuala Lumpur in 1986, for ABC.
Revised:  For instance, he recalled, Phua spent much of his time getting access to a block of flats to get a good elevated shot of the prison in order to cover the news of the hanging of two Australian traffickers in Kuala Lumpur in 1986, for ABC.
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Original:  For instance, he recalled, Phua spent much of his time getting access to a block of flats in order to get a good elevated shot of the prison in order to cover the news of the hanging of two Australian traffickers in Kuala Lumpur in 1986, for ABC.
Revised:  For instance, he recalled, Phua spent much of his time getting access to a block of flats in order to get a good elevated shot of the prison to cover the news of the hanging of two Australian traffickers in Kuala Lumpur in 1986, for ABC.
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Original: Philip Williams and Willie Phua in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 363-365, 370-371 In November 1996, Phua received the Honorary Medal of the Order of Australia for his services.
Revised: Philip Williams and Willie Phua in Wurth, 'Capturing Asia', pp 363–365, 370–371 In November 1996, Phua received the Honorary Medal of the Order of Australia for his services.
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Original:  The citation for Phua ’ s award read:‘Mr Phua’s camera work has been responsible for Australians seeing all aspects of life in Asia, thus stimulating Australian interest in the region.’
Revised:  The citation for Phua ' s award read:‘Mr Phua’s camera work has been responsible for Australians seeing all aspects of life in Asia, thus stimulating Australian interest in the region.’
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Original: John McBeth, Straits Times, Singapore, March 1 , 2008.
Revised: John McBeth, Straits Times, Singapore, 1 , 2008.
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