wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Puppet show is a holy hit, hands down Recent Trends frame|Blacklight Puppet Though rod-arm puppetry continues to be the most common technique in Christian circles, some other forms have begun to gain popularity.
Revised:  Puppet show is a holy hit, hands down Techniques frame|Blacklight Puppet Though rod-arm puppetry continues to be the most common technique in Christian circles, some other forms have begun to gain popularity.
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Original:  Blacklight Puppetry Blacklight Puppetry capitalizes on the novelty of ultra-violet lights, or black light.
Revised:  Blacklight puppetry Blacklight puppetry capitalizes on the novelty of ultra-violet lights, or black light.
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Original:  Dowel Rod Dowel Rod Puppetry combines interpretive dance and the use of (typically) two simple dowels .
Revised:  Dowel rods Dowel rod puppetry combines interpretive dance and the use of (typically) two simple dowels .
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Original: Bezuidenhout was generally known as a vindictive man, unapproachable by most people ;
Revised: Bezuidenhout was generally known as a difficult man ;
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Original: Life and death Cornelis Frederik Bezuidenhout, known by the nickname Freek, was the fifth of seven children of Wynand Jacobus Bezuidenhout, a burgher of Graaff-Reinet, and his wife, Maria Terblans, a descendant of Wynand Leendertsz Bezuidenhout, of the Netherlands, master gardener at the Cape, and his wife, Jannetje Gerrits, of Amsterdam.
Revised: Life and death Cornelis Frederik Bezuidenhout, known by the nickname Freek, was the fifth of seven children of Gerrit Bezuidenhout, a burgher of Graaff-Reinet, and his wife, Maria Terblans, a descendant of Wynand Leendertsz Bezuidenhout, of the Netherlands, master gardener at the Cape, and his wife, Jannetje Gerrits, of Amsterdam.
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Original:  Geofencing used with locationized firearms can restrict those firearms to fire only in locations where their firing is permitted, thereby making them unable to be used elsewhere.
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Original:  Other applications include sending an alert if a vehicle is stolen, and notifying rangers when wildlife stray into farmland.
Revised:  and notifying rangers when wildlife stray into farmland.
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Original: Fresh frozen plasma is on the WHO Model List of Essential Medicines, the most important medications needed in a basic health system.
Revised: Fresh frozen plasma is on the WHO Model List of Essential Medicines, the most important medications needed in a basic father system.
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Original: Following the "Plasma for Britain" invention , Drew was named director of the Red Cross blood bank and assistant director of the National Research Council, in charge of blood collection for the United States Army and Navy.
Revised: Following the Supplying Blood Plasma to England project , Drew was named director of the Red Cross blood bank and assistant director of the National Research Council, in charge of blood collection for the United States Army and Navy.
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Original:  The Physics Factbook – Density of Blood Nevertheless, the decision was made to develop a dried plasma package for the armed forces as it would reduce breakage and make the transportation, packaging, and storage much simpler.
Revised:  Nevertheless, the decision was made to develop a dried plasma package for the armed forces as it would reduce breakage and make the transportation, packaging, and storage much simpler.
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Original:  Transfusion before World War I The resulting dried plasma package came in two tin cans containing 400 cc bottles.
Revised:  The resulting dried plasma package came in two tin cans containing 400 cc bottles.
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Original:  Plasma Equipment and Packaging, and Transfusion Equipment The Blood for Britain program operated successfully for five months, with total collections of almost 15,000 people donating blood, and with over 5,500 vials of blood plasma.
Revised:  The Blood for Britain program operated successfully for five months, with total collections of almost 15,000 people donating blood, and with over 5,500 vials of blood plasma.
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Original:  It was several more years before a functional analysis of the vertebrate slit and robo mutants was performed;
Revised:  It was several more years before a functional analysis of the vertebrate Slit and Robo mutants was performed;
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Original:  Most axons in the CNS cross the midline at some point during nervous system development.
Revised:  Most axons in the CNS cross the midline during nervous system development.
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Original:  In vertebrates, Robo1 and Robo2 are expressed in commisural axons, and act as repulsive receptors for the Slit ligands expressed by floor plate cells located at the midline.
Revised:  In vertebrates, Robo1 and Robo2 are expressed on commissural axons, and act as repulsive receptors for the Slit ligands expressed by floor plate cells located at the midline.
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Original:  However, the mechanism by which Robo3 promotes midline crossing remains unclear.
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Original: In bilaterial animals, including insects and mammals, most axons in the CNS cross the midline during nervous system development.
Revised: In bilaterian animals, including insects and mammals, most axons in the CNS cross the midline during nervous system development.
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Original:  In vertebrates , Robo1 and Robo2 are expressed on commissural axons , and act as repulsive receptors for the Slit ligands expressed by floor plate cells located at the midline.
Revised:  In the vertebrate spinal cord , Robo1 and Robo2 are expressed on commissural axons , and act as repulsive receptors for the Slit ligands expressed by floor plate cells located at the midline.
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Original:  In vertebrates , Robo1 and Robo2 are expressed on commissural axons , and act as repulsive receptors for the Slit ligands expressed by floor plate cells located at the midline.
Revised:  In vertebrates , Robo1 and Robo2 are expressed on commissural axons and act as repulsive receptors for the Slit ligands expressed by floor plate cells located at the midline.
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Original:   Robo3/Rig1 is alternatively spliced to generate a protein that inhibits Robo1 /2-mediated repulsion, effectively leading to the promotion of midline crossing.
Revised:  In contrast, Robo3/Rig1 is alternatively spliced to generate a protein that inhibits Robo1 /2-mediated repulsion, effectively leading to the promotion of midline crossing.
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Original:  The exact mechanism by which Robo3 achieves this pro-crossing activity is unknown . Robo receptors have also been shown to be crucial regulators of many other axon pathfinding decisions during development, including the projection of retinal axons in the optic tract , and of olfactory axons in the olfactory epithelium.
Revised:  The exact mechanism by which Robo3 achieves this pro-crossing activity is unknown . Robo receptors have also been shown to be crucial regulators of many other axon pathfinding decisions during development, including the projection of axons in the optic tract , and of olfactory axons in the olfactory epithelium.
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Original:  The exact mechanism by which Robo3 achieves this pro-crossing activity is unknown . Robo receptors have also been shown to be crucial regulators of many other axon pathfinding decisions during development, including the projection of retinal axons in the optic tract , and of olfactory axons in the olfactory epithelium.
Revised:  The exact mechanism by which Robo3 achieves this pro-crossing activity is unknown . Robo receptors have also been shown to be crucial regulators of many other axon pathfinding decisions during development, including the projection of retinal axons in the optic tract and in the olfactory epithelium.
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Original:  Better transfusion practice should not be viewed as an option, but a necessity to ensure clinicians are doing good and not doing harm to their patients.
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Original:  Necessity Evidence indicates that a great number of the patients who are being transfused today may not be seeing many tangible benefits from it, as the transfused blood fails to achieve its primary goals – prevention of ischemia and improving the clinical outcomes.
Revised:  Necessity Evidence indicates that a great number of the patients who are being transfused may not be seeing many tangible benefits from it, as the transfused blood fails to achieve its primary goals – prevention of ischemia and improving the clinical outcomes.
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Original:  The more blood that is transfused directly impacts hospital expenditures, and of course, it behoves administrators to search for ways to reduce this cost.
Revised:  The more blood that is transfused directly impacts hospital expenditures, and it behooves administrators to search for ways to reduce this cost.
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Original:  Benefits of Information Technology in PBM Information technology can be useful in implementing a patient blood management policy, this includes:
Revised:  Benefits of information technology in PBM Information technology can be useful in implementing a patient blood management policy, this includes:
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Original:  Additional details on this question can be found in the journal, Transfusion   .
Revised:  Additional details on this question can be found in the journal, Transfusion . .
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Original:  Improved management of blood components, leading to decreased wastage References See also Bloodless surgery  Further reading
Revised:  Improved management of blood components, leading to decreased wastage See also Bloodless surgery Further reading
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Original:  Improved management of blood components, leading to decreased wastage References See also Bloodless surgery  Further reading
Revised:  Improved management of blood components, leading to decreased wastage References See also Bloodless surgery References Further reading
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Original:  Her most recent role is on Chinese TV singing shows such as The Voice of China.
Revised:  She is known for her prominent recent roles as as a judge on Chinese TV singing shows such as The Voice of China.
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Original:  Na began her recording career in 1988 in Taiwan and Hong Kong.
Revised:  began her recording career in 1988 in Taiwan and Hong Kong.
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Original:  The Voice of China and new projects In 2012, Na became a coach and judge on the first season of the popular television singing show The Voice of China, along with Yang Kun, Liu Huan and Yu Chengqing.
Revised:  The Voice of China In 2012, Na became a coach and judge on the first season of the popular television singing show The Voice of China, along with Yang Kun, Liu Huan and Yu Chengqing.
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Original:  She was also on the second season of the show in 2017.
Revised:  In 2017, she was also on the second season of the show in 2017.
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Original:   In 2018, Na Ying and Faye Wong performed together on the CCTV new year's gala singing the song "Lunar year"   .
Revised:  In 2018, Na Ying and Faye Wong performed together on the CCTV new year's gala singing the song "Lunar year" . .
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Original: Na Ying (born 27 November 1967 ) is a Chinese singer and musical judge.
Revised: Na Ying (born 27 November 1968 ) is a Chinese singer and musical judge.
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Original: Na Ying (born 27 November 1968 ) is a Chinese singer and musical judge.
Revised: Na Ying (born 27 November 1967 ) is a Chinese singer and musical judge.
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Original:  She is known for her prominent recent roles as a judge on Chinese TV singing shows such as The Voice of China.
Revised:  She is known for her prominent roles as a judge on Chinese TV singing shows such as The Voice of China.
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Original: In 2021, she announced that she would be returning to the anniversary season of Sing China, alongside with Wang Feng, Li Ronghao and Hacken Lee.
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Original: Na Ying (born 27 November 1967) is a  Chinese singer and musical judge.
Revised: Na Ying (born 27 November 1967) is a veteran Chinese singer and musical judge.
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Original:  They can also be found on hard substrates living on algae, the phytal environment, and sessile invertebrates (barnacles, mussel beds, etc.).
Revised:  They can also be found on hard substrates living on algae, the phytal environment, and sessile animals (barnacles, mussel beds, etc.).
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Original: Protozoa Foraminifera Ciliophora Animalia—Eumetazoa Cnidaria Triploblastica—Bilateria Protostomia—Spiralia Schizocelia Sipuncula Articulata Mollusca Euarticulata Annelida Oligochaeta Polychaeta Panarthropoda Onychophora Arthropoda Tardigrada Amphipoda Cladocera Cumacea Harpacticoida Isopoda Ostracoda Mystacocarida Syncarida Tanaidacea Thermosbaenacea Halacarida Pycnogonida Palpigradida Insecta Bryozoa Entoprocta Ectoprocta Paranchymia Platyhelminthes (Turbellaria)
Revised: Protozoa Foraminifera Ciliophora Animalia—Eumetazoa Cnidaria Triploblastica—Bilateria Protostomia—Spiralia Schizocelia Sipuncula Articulata Mollusca Euarticulata Annelida Oligochaeta Polychaeta Panarthropoda Tardigrada Onychophora Arthropoda Amphipoda Cladocera Cumacea Harpacticoida Isopoda Ostracoda Mystacocarida Syncarida Tanaidacea Thermosbaenacea Halacarida Pycnogonida Palpigradida Insecta Bryozoa Entoprocta Ectoprocta Paranchymia Platyhelminthes (Turbellaria)
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Original:  The second methodology, the floatation technique, works best with finer sediments where the mass of the sediment particles is close to that of the meiofauna.
Revised:  The second methodology, the flotation technique, works best with finer sediments where the mass of the sediment particles is close to that of the meiofauna.
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Original: Meiofaunal taxa Based on the scheme of Nielsen (2001) .
Revised: Meiofaunal taxa Meiofaunal taxa based on the scheme of Nielsen (2001) .
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Original:  Ba also proposed a theory to illustrate the relationship between some abnormal immune functions and the hypertension .
Revised:  Ba also proposed a theory to illustrate the relationship between some abnormal immune functions and the hypertension !
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Original:  This is where she raised her two children, Michelle and Craig, and continued to live till she eventually moved to the White House with the Obamas.
Revised:  This is where she raised her two children, Michelle and Craig, and continued to live until she eventually moved to the White House with the Obamas.
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Original:  During Barack Obama's presidency, Robinson was living in the White House in support of the First Family.
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Original:  During Barack Obama's presidency, Robinson was living in the White House in support of the First Family.
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Original:  born July 29, 1937) is the mother of Michelle Obama, former First Lady of the United States, and Craig Robinson, a basketball executive , and the mother-in-law of former U.S. President Barack Obama.
Revised:  born July 29, 1937) is the mother of Michelle Obama, former First Lady of the United States, and Craig Robinson, a basketball executive . She is also the mother-in-law of former U.S. President Barack Obama.
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Original:  born July 29, 1937) is the mother of Michelle Obama, former First Lady of the United States, and Craig Robinson, a basketball executive.
Revised:  born July 29, 1937) is the mother of Michael Obama, former First Lady of the United States, and Craig Robinson, a basketball executive.
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Original:  born July 29, 1937) is the mother of Michael Obama, former First Lady of the United States, and Craig Robinson, a basketball executive.
Revised:  born July 29, 1937) is the mother of Michelle Obama, former First Lady of the United States, and Craig Robinson, a basketball executive.
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Original: Roughly speaking, in decision theory, game theory, and rational choice, menu dependence arises when the evaluation of alternatives for choice or the mode of selection guiding choice varies parametrically with what collection of alternatives is available for choice .
Revised: Roughly speaking, in decision theory, game theory, and rational choice, menu dependence arises when the evaluation of alternatives for choice or the mode of selection guiding choice varies parametrically with what collection of alternatives is available for choice (i.e., with what "menu" or decision problem a decision maker is facing).
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Original:  Menu dependence is often informally associated with  the addition of irrelevant alternatives which change a player 's order of preference among the relevant alternatives
Revised:  While the phenomenon can arise in a variety of ways, menu dependence is often informally associated with the addition of irrelevant alternatives which change a player 's order of preference among the relevant alternatives
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Original:  Menu dependence is often informally associated with  the addition of irrelevant alternatives which change a player 's order of preference among the relevant alternatives
Revised:  Menu dependence is often informally associated with a change in a decision maker's preferences among alternatives with the addition of irrelevant alternatives which change a player 's order of preference among the relevant alternatives
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Original:  Menu dependence is often informally associated with  the addition of irrelevant alternatives which change a player 's order of preference among the relevant alternatives
Revised:  Menu dependence is often informally associated with the addition of irrelevant alternatives which change a decision maker 's order of preference among the relevant alternatives
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Original:  While the phenomenon can arise in a variety of ways, menu dependence is often informally associated with a change in a decision maker's preferences among alternatives with the addition of irrelevant alternatives which change a decision maker's order of preference among the relevant alternatives
Revised:  While the phenomenon can arise in a variety of ways, menu dependence is often informally associated with a change in a decision maker's preferences among alternatives with the addition of irrelevant alternatives 
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Original: Collaborations Pauline Oliveros, The Nihilist Spasm Band, Lee Ranaldo (Sonic Youth), Damo Suzuki (Can), Masonna, RLW, KK Null, Makoto Kawabata (Acid Mothers Temple), Yoshimi (Boredoms, OOIOO), Sir Rick Bishop (Sun City Girls), MSBR, Toshimaru Nakamura, Eddie Prévost (AMM), Lasse Marhaug, Mats Gustafsson, Glenn Donaldson (Jewelled Antler, Thuja), Kouhei Matsunaga, Rudolf Eb.
Revised:  Pauline Oliveros, The Nihilist Spasm Band, Lee Ranaldo (Sonic Youth), Damo Suzuki (Can), Masonna, RLW, KK Null, Makoto Kawabata (Acid Mothers Temple), Yoshimi (Boredoms, OOIOO), Sir Rick Bishop (Sun City Girls), MSBR, Toshimaru Nakamura, Eddie Prévost (AMM), Lasse Marhaug, Mats Gustafsson, Glenn Donaldson (Jewelled Antler, Thuja), Kouhei Matsunaga, Rudolf Eb.
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Original:  Indonesia/Belgium ANLA COURTIS, Mama Baer & Kommissar Hjuler "Die Antizipation des Generalized Other" (2011) CD SHMF. Germany ALAN COURTIS, JAIME GENOVART, CHRISTOF KURZMANN, PABLO RECHE "Palmar Zähler" (2009) Mikroton Recordings CD 2. Russia "Unstringed Guitar & Cymbals" (2008) BN034CD.
Revised:  Indonesia/Belgium ANLA COURTIS, MAMA BAER & Kommissar Hjuler "Die Antizipation des Generalized Other" (2011) CD SHMF. Germany ALAN COURTIS, JAIME GENOVART, CHRISTOF KURZMANN, PABLO RECHE "Palmar Zähler" (2009) Mikroton Recordings CD 2. Russia "Unstringed Guitar & Cymbals" (2008) BN034CD.
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Original:  Indonesia/Belgium ANLA COURTIS, Mama Baer & Kommissar Hjuler "Die Antizipation des Generalized Other" (2011) CD SHMF. Germany ALAN COURTIS, JAIME GENOVART, CHRISTOF KURZMANN, PABLO RECHE "Palmar Zähler" (2009) Mikroton Recordings CD 2. Russia "Unstringed Guitar & Cymbals" (2008) BN034CD.
Revised:  Indonesia/Belgium ANLA COURTIS, Mama Baer & KOMMISSAR HJULER "Die Antizipation des Generalized Other" (2011) CD SHMF. Germany ALAN COURTIS, JAIME GENOVART, CHRISTOF KURZMANN, PABLO RECHE "Palmar Zähler" (2009) Mikroton Recordings CD 2. Russia "Unstringed Guitar & Cymbals" (2008) BN034CD.
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Original:  Indonesia/Belgium ANLA COURTIS, MAMA BAER & KOMMISSAR HJULER "Die Antizipation des Generalized Other" (2011) CD SHMF. Germany ALAN COURTIS, JAIME GENOVART, CHRISTOF KURZMANN, PABLO RECHE "Palmar Zähler" (2009) Mikroton Recordings CD 2. Russia "Unstringed Guitar & Cymbals" (2008) BN034CD.
Revised:  Indonesia/Belgium ANLA COURTIS, MAMA BAER & KOMMISSAR HJULER "Die Antizipation des Generalized Other" (2011) SHMF. Germany ALAN COURTIS, JAIME GENOVART, CHRISTOF KURZMANN, PABLO RECHE "Palmar Zähler" (2009) Mikroton Recordings CD 2. Russia "Unstringed Guitar & Cymbals" (2008) BN034CD.
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Original: Alan Courtis was born in Buenos Aires, Argentina on February 22, 1972.
Revised: Alan Courtis (born February 22, 1972 in Buenos Aires, Argentina on February 22, 1972.
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Original:  Institute of Occupational Medicine Research Report TM/05/06 "The metal that brought you cheap flights", BBC  Category: Chemical elements Category:Transition metals Category:Native element minerals Category: Biology and pharmacology of chemical elements Category:  Dietary minerals Category:  Ferromagnetic materials Category:IARC Group 2B carcinogens Category: FCC crystal hab
Revised:  Institute of Occupational Medicine Research Report TM/05/06 "The metal that brought you cheap flights", BBC Category: Biology and pharmacology of chemical elements Category: Dietary minerals Category: Ferromagnetic materials Category:IARC Group 2B carcinogens Category: FCC crystal hab
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Original:  Institute of Occupational Medicine Research Report TM/05/06 "The metal that brought you cheap flights", BBC  Category: Chemical elements Category:Transition metals Category:Native element minerals Category: Biology and pharmacology of chemical elements Category:  Dietary minerals Category:  Ferromagnetic materials Category:IARC Group 2B carcinogens Category: FCC crystal hab
Revised:  Institute of Occupational Medicine Research Report TM/05/06 "The metal that brought you cheap flights", BBC Category: Chemical elements Category:Transition metals Category:Native element minerals Category: Biology and pharmacology of chemical elements Category: Chemical elements Category: Dietary minerals Category: Ferromagnetic materials Category:IARC Group 2B carcinogens Category: FCC crystal hab
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Original:  Institute of Occupational Medicine Research Report TM/05/06 "The metal that brought you cheap flights", BBC  Category: Chemical elements Category:Transition metals Category:Native element minerals Category: Biology and pharmacology of chemical elements Category:  Dietary minerals Category:  Ferromagnetic materials Category:IARC Group 2B carcinogens Category: FCC crystal hab
Revised:  Institute of Occupational Medicine Research Report TM/05/06 "The metal that brought you cheap flights", BBC Category: Chemical elements Category:Transition metals Category:Native element minerals Category: Biology and pharmacology of chemical elements Category: Dietary minerals Category: FCC crystal habit Category: Ferromagnetic materials Category:IARC Group 2B carcinogens Category: FCC crystal hab
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