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Original:  Mount Mayon has erupted 47 times in recorded history, with the last major eruption in 2001 shooting ash nearly 10km above the volcan
Revised:  Mount Mayon has erupted 47 times in recorded history, with the last major eruption in 2001 shooting ash nearly 10km above the volcano
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Original: British Environment Secretary, David Miliband , has proposed an individual carbon trading scheme  during the Audit Commission's annual lecture.
Revised: The UK Environment Secretary, David Miliband , has proposed an individual carbon trading scheme during the Audit Commission's annual lecture.
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Original: British Environment Secretary, David Miliband , has proposed an individual carbon trading scheme  during the Audit Commission's annual lecture.
Revised: British Environment Secretary, David Miliband proposed a carbon trading scheme during the Audit Commission's annual lecture.
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Original:  Under the scheme all individuals will receive equal carbon points .
Revised:  Under the scheme all individuals will receive equal carbon points 
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Original:  Individuals would be able to trade electricity, gas, petrol and air travel for carbon points.
Revised:  and can trade electricity, gas, petrol and air travel for carbon points.
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Original:  He says that people with low income because the emit less carbon could benefit from selling off excess carbon points.
Revised:  He says that people with low income who contribute less to carbon emission could benefit by selling off excess carbon points.
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Original:  He also says that it was more empowering than other forms of regulations such as banning particular products, services or activities, or taxing them heavily.
Revised:  He also says that the scheme is more empowering than other forms of regulations such as banning particular products, services or activities, or taxing them heavily.
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Original:  Mr. Huhne argues that that this would take too long to implement.
Revised:  but also argues that that this would take too long to implement.
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Original:  He also says that green taxes have fallen to their lowest since Margaret Thatcher was Prime Minster
Revised:  He said that green taxes have fallen to their lowest since Margaret Thatcher was Prime Minster
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Original: The UK Environment Secretary, David Miliband proposed a carbon trading scheme for private citizens during the Audit Commission's annual lecture.
Revised: British Environment Secretary, David Miliband proposed a carbon trading scheme for private citizens during the Audit Commission's annual lecture.
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Original: The UK Environment Secretary, David Miliband proposed a carbon trading scheme for private citizens during the Audit Commission's annual lecture.
Revised: The UK Environment Secretary, David Miliband proposed a carbon trading scheme during the Audit Commission's annual lecture.
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Original:  Under the scheme all individuals will receive equal carbon points and can  trade electricity, gas, petrol and air travel for carbon points.
Revised:  Under the scheme all individuals will receive equal carbon points . trade electricity, gas, petrol and air travel for carbon points.
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Original:  He says that people with low income who contribute less to carbon emission could benefit by selling off excess carbon points.
Revised:  He says that people with low income because the emit less carbon could benefit from selling off excess carbon points.
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Original:  He also says that the scheme is more empowering than other forms of regulations such as banning particular products, services or activities, or taxing them heavily.
Revised:  He also says that it was more empowering than other forms of regulations such as banning particular products, services or activities, or taxing them heavily.
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Original:  Chris Huhne, the Liberal Democrats' environment spokesman, “supported any discussion about household carbon allowances”. but also argues that that this would take too long to implement.
Revised:  Chris Huhne, the Liberal Democrats' environment spokesman, “supported any discussion about household carbon allowances”. Mr. Huhne argues that that this would take too long to implement.
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Original:  He said that green taxes have fallen to their lowest since Margaret Thatcher was Prime Minster
Revised:  He also says that green taxes have fallen to their lowest since Margaret Thatcher was Prime Minster
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Original:  She is now under going counselling.
Revised:  She is now undergoing counselling.
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Original:  Ron Mark, New Zealand First Party Law and Order spokesman, said "the case is concerning, because while prostitution is legal, it is associated with criminal activity.   
Revised:  Ron Mark, New Zealand First Party Law and Order spokesman, said "the case is concerning, because while prostitution is legal, it is associated with criminal activity. " 
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Original:  Commonsense dictates that most officers simply know that sex work is not compatible with their role as police officers.
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Original:  Noonan, who refers to Obama as " Barry Soetero", said his most recent suit was dismissed in court.
Revised:  Noonan, who refers to Obama as " Mr. Soetero", said his most recent suit was dismissed in court.
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Original:  He believes Obama's birth certificate is " a forged and a fraudulent document" due to "multiple layers of different typewriter font sizes", signatures in "multi-colored [ink] and sliced into the document in different patches."
Revised:  He believes Obama's birth certificate " a forged and a fraudulent document" due to "multiple layers of different typewriter font sizes", signatures in "multi-colored [ink] and sliced into the document in different patches."
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Original:  He believes Obama's birth certificate is " a forged and a fraudulent document" due to "multiple layers of different typewriter font sizes", signatures in "multi-colored [ink] and sliced into the document in different patches."
Revised:  He believes Obama's birth certificate is " is forged and a fraudulent document" due to "multiple layers of different typewriter font sizes", signatures in "multi-colored [ink] and sliced into the document in different patches."
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Original:  Furthermore, he says that without a legitimate birth certificate, Obama "cannot prove that he is an American citizen [because his]... was a foreign national from Kenya . "  Noonan says that this disqualifies Obama from being president.
Revised:  Furthermore, he says that without a legitimate birth certificate, Obama "cannot prove that he is an American citizen [because his]... was a foreign national from Kenya " Noonan says that this disqualifies Obama from being president.
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Original:  Furthermore, he says that without a legitimate birth certificate, Obama "cannot prove that he is an American citizen [because his]... was a foreign national from Kenya . "  Noonan says that this disqualifies Obama from being president.
Revised:  Furthermore, he says that without a legitimate birth certificate, Obama "cannot prove that he is an American citizen [because his]... was a foreign national from Kenya . " . Noonan says that this disqualifies Obama from being president.
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Original: Category:United States Category:Economy and Business Category:North Carolina JetBlue Airways launched service from Raleigh-Durham International Airport to John F. Kennedey International Airport on Thursday, July 20.
Revised:  JetBlue Airways launched service from Raleigh-Durham International Airport to John F. Kennedey International Airport on Thursday, July 20.
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Original:  The aircraft are equiped with DIRECTV and XM Satellite Radio programming.
Revised:  The aircraft are equiped with DirecTV and XM Satellite Radio programming.
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Original:  On October 18 , JetBlue's service from Raleigh to Boston will begin with one daily flight.
Revised:  On October 18 JetBlue's service from Raleigh to Boston will begin with one daily flight.
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Original:  On October 18 , JetBlue's service from Raleigh to Boston will begin with one daily flight.
Revised:  On October 18 , JetBlue's service from Raleigh Boston will begin with one daily flight.
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Original:  JetBlue Airways launched service from Raleigh-Durham International Airport to John F. Kennedey International Airport on Thursday, July 20.
Revised: right JetBlue Airways launched service from Raleigh-Durham International Airport to John F. Kennedey International Airport on Thursday, July 20.
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Original: JetBlue Airways launched service from Raleigh-Durham International Airport to John F. Kennedey International Airport on Thursday, July 20.
Revised: JetBlue Airways launched service from Raleigh-Durham International Airport to John F. Kennedy International Airport on Thursday, July 20.
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Original:  He routinely made assurances on national TV in the aftermath of attacks, and recently vowed  "  terrorists" would not have an impact on government .
Revised:  He routinely made assurances on the People's Television Network in the aftermath of attacks, and recently vowed " terrorists" would not have an impact on government .
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Original:  He routinely made assurances on national TV in the aftermath of attacks, and recently vowed  "  terrorists" would not have an impact on government .
Revised:  He routinely made assurances on national TV in the aftermath of attacks, and recently vowed that the " terrorists" would not have an impact on government .
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Original:  He routinely made assurances on national TV in the aftermath of attacks, and recently vowed  "  terrorists" would not have an impact on government .
Revised:  He routinely made assurances on national TV in the aftermath of attacks, and recently vowed " terrorists" would not have an impact on governmental functions .
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Original: Internal FDA communications attributed to safety officers point to potential safety oversights of antibiotic telithromycin (Ketek), an antibiotic prescribed more than 5 million times since its 2004 FDA approval.
Revised: Internal FDA communications attributed to safety officers point to potential safety oversights of antibiotic Telithromycin (Ketek), an antibiotic prescribed more than 5 million times since its 2004 FDA approval.
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Original:  The  Times reports that David Graham, one of four FDA safety officials concerned about safety of the antibiotic in both adults and children, wrote in an E-mail message to another agency official that the drug's 2004 U.S. approval was in error and should be withdrawn.
Revised:  The New York Times reports that David Graham, one of four FDA safety officials concerned about safety of the antibiotic in both adults and children, wrote in an E-mail message to another agency official that the drug's 2004 U.S. approval was in error and should be withdrawn.
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Original:  Liver failure has been reported in fourteen adult patients, four of whom died, and another twenty-three sustained "serious liver injury," according to The Times July 18 article"Approval of Antibiotic Worried Safety Officials".
Revised:  Liver failure has been reported in fourteen adult patients, four of whom died, and another twenty-three sustained "serious liver injury," according to The Times article.
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Original:  The Times released excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16, which included this statement: “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
Revised:  The Times released excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16, which included this statement: “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
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Original:  In the document, Graham subsequently advised telithromycin 's "immediate withdrawal" from the U.S. prescription drug market.
Revised:  In the document, Graham subsequently advised Telithromycin 's "immediate withdrawal" from the U.S. prescription drug market.
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Original:  Aside  from Dr. Graham, three other FDA officials have been named as critics of telithromycin safety reports: Dr. Charles Cooper, Dr. David Ross and Dr. Rosemary Johann-Liang.
Revised:  Aside Apart from Dr. Graham, three other FDA officials have been named as critics of telithromycin safety reports: Dr. Charles Cooper, Dr. David Ross and Dr. Rosemary Johann-Liang.
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Original:  Aside  from Dr. Graham, three other FDA officials have been named as critics of telithromycin safety reports: Dr. Charles Cooper, Dr. David Ross and Dr. Rosemary Johann-Liang.
Revised:  Aside from Dr. Graham, three other FDA officials have been named as critics of Telithromycin safety reports: Dr. Charles Cooper, Dr. David Ross and Dr. Rosemary Johann-Liang.
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Original:  Although claiming to receive more than "dozens" of messages (presumably e-mails), The Times did not disclose the sourc
Revised:  Although claiming to receive more than "dozens" of messages (presumably e-mails), The Times did not disclose the source
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Original:  Safety concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other neurvous system effects (reported blackouts) , including potentially mortal consequences of myasthenia gravis.
Revised:  Safety concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other neurvous system effects (reported blackouts) and myasthenia gravis.
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Original:  Liver failure has been reported in fourteen adult patients, four of whom died, and another twenty-three sustained "serious liver injury , " according to The Times article .
Revised:  Liver failure has been reported in fourteen adult patients, four of whom died, and another twenty-three sustained "serious liver injury . " according to The Times article .
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Original:  The Times released excerpts of Dr.  Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16, which included this statement: “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
Revised:  The Times released excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16, include this statement: “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
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Original:  The Times characterized the internal FDA climate as a "fierce battle," a climate which is most likely fueled by the increased press attention in recent months.
Revised:  The Times characterized the internal FDA climate as a "fierce battle," which is most likely fueled by the increased press attention in recent months.
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Original:  The Times reports that Senator Charles E. Grassley (R-Iowa, chairman, Senate Finance Committee) is "investigating" the issue with Representatives Edward J. Markey (D-Mass) and Henry A.
Revised:  Senator Charles E. Grassley (R-Iowa, chairman, Senate Finance Committee) is "investigating" the issue with Representatives Edward J. Markey (D-Mass) and Henry A.
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Original:  Safety concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other neurvous system effects (reported blackouts) and myasthenia gravis.
Revised:  The concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other neurvous system effects (reported blackouts) and myasthenia gravis.
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Original:  Safety concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other neurvous system effects (reported blackouts) and myasthenia gravis.
Revised:  Safety concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other nervous system effects (reported blackouts) and myasthenia gravis.
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Original:  Safety concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other neurvous system effects (reported blackouts) and myasthenia gravis.
Revised:  Safety concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other neurvous system effects (reported blackouts) and in patients suffering from myasthenia gravis, it can cause death.
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Original:  FDA issued a public advisory on January 20, 2006 regarding data published in the Annals of Internal Medicine that described serious liver toxicity in three patients after taking telithromycin, one of whom died.
Revised:  In January 2006 regarding data published in the Annals of Internal Medicine that described serious liver toxicity in three patients after taking telithromycin, one of whom died.
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Original:  FDA issued a public advisory on January 20, 2006 regarding data published in the Annals of Internal Medicine that described serious liver toxicity in three patients after taking telithromycin, one of whom died.
Revised:  FDA issued a public advisory on January 20, 2006 , after cases of serious liver toxicity were reported in the Annals of Internal Medicine that described serious liver toxicity in three patients after taking telithromycin, one of whom died.
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Original:  FDA also announced that it had  required the manufacturer to change the product labeling to reflect this safety assessment.
Revised:  FDA also announced that it had completed its safety assessment and required the manufacturer to change the product labeling to reflect this safety assessment.
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Original:  The drug, marketed under the trade name Ketek, and is widely used since its 2004 FDA approval.
Revised:  The drug, marketed under the trade name Ketek, has been widely prescribed since its 2004 FDA approval.
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Original:  The concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other nervous system effects (reported blackouts) and in patients suffering from myasthenia gravis, it can cause death.
Revised:  The concerns focus on the drug's liver toxicity, but also extends to vision problems and other nervous system effects (reported blackouts) and in patients suffering from myasthenia gravis, which can cause death.
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Original:  Liver failure has been reported in fourteen adult patients, four of whom died , and another twenty-three sustained "serious liver injury."
Revised:  Liver failure has been reported in fourteen adult patients, four of whom died ; another twenty-three sustained "serious liver injury."
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Original:  Excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16 , 2006 published by the Times show strong criticism of the drug's approval , “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
Revised:  Excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal June 16 , 2006 published by the Times show strong criticism of the drug's approval , “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
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Original:  Excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16 , 2006 published by the Times show strong criticism of the drug's approval , “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
Revised:  Excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16 memorandum published by the Times show strong criticism of the drug's approval , “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
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Original:  Excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16 , 2006 published by the Times show strong criticism of the drug's approval , “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
Revised:  Excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16 , 2006 published by the Times reveal strong criticism of the drug's approval , “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
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Original:  Excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16 , 2006 published by the Times show strong criticism of the drug's approval , “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
Revised:  Excerpts of Dr. Graham's internal memorandum dated June 16 , 2006 published by the Times show strong criticism of the drug's approval . “It’s as if every principle governing the review and approval of new drugs was abandoned or suspended where Telithromycin is concerned,” Dr. Graham wrote.
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Original:  Apart from Dr. Graham, three other FDA officials have been named as critics of Telithromycin safety reports : Dr. Charles Cooper, Dr. David Ross and Dr. Rosemary Johann-Liang.
Revised:  Apart from Dr. Graham, three other FDA officials have been identified as critics of Telithromycin safety reports : Dr. Charles Cooper, Dr. David Ross and Dr. Rosemary Johann-Liang.
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Original:  Although claiming to receive more than "dozens" of messages (presumably e-mails), The Times did not disclose the source
Revised:  Although The Times claimed to receive more than "dozens" of messages (presumably e-mails), The Times did not disclose the source
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Original:  Although claiming to receive more than "dozens" of messages (presumably e-mails), The Times did not disclose the source
Revised:  Although claiming to receive more than "dozens" of messages (presumably e-mails), the paper did not disclose the source
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Original: The  New York Times reports that safety officials working for the Food and Drug Administration have expressed concerns over the safety of an antibiotic, Telithromycin and questioned its approval for use.
Revised: The w: New York Times reports that safety officials working for the Food and Drug Administration have expressed concerns over the safety of an antibiotic, Telithromycin and questioned its approval for use.
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Original: The New York Times reports that safety officials working for the Food and Drug Administration have expressed concerns over the safety of an antibiotic, Telithromycin and questioned its approval for use.
Revised: The New York Times reports that safety officials working for the have expressed concerns over the safety of an antibiotic, Telithromycin and questioned its approval for use.
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Original: The New York Times reports that safety officials working for the Food and Drug Administration have expressed concerns over the safety of an antibiotic, Telithromycin and questioned its approval for use.
Revised: The New York Times reports that safety officials working for the Food and Drug Administration have expressed concerns over the safety of an antibiotic, telithromycin and questioned its approval for use.
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Original:  Senator Charles E. Grassley (R-Iowa, chairman, Senate Finance Committee) is "investigating" the issue with Representatives Edward J. Markey (D-Mass) and Henry A.
Revised:  Senator Charles E. Grassley (R-Iowa, chairman, Senate Finance Committee) is "investigating" the issue with Representatives (D-Mass) and Henry A.
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