wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The incident was seen an important test for a leadership team in its first year : Kelly, Athletic Director Bellotti, and University of Oregon President Lariviere were each entering the first year of his position.
Revised: The incident was seen an important test for a leadership team in its first year : Kelly, Athletic Director Bellotti, and University of Oregon President Lariviere had each just entered the first year of his position.
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Original:  The Broncos, whose "mid-major" Western Athletic Conference is less competitive than the Ducks' Pac-10 Conference, have improved in recent years, and had previously defeated the Ducks in 2008.
Revised:  The Broncos, whose "mid-major" Western Athletic Conference is less competitive than the Ducks' Pac-10 Conference, and had previously defeated the Ducks in 2008.
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Original:  The Broncos, whose "mid-major" Western Athletic Conference is less competitive than the Ducks' Pac-10 Conference, and had previously defeated the Ducks in 2008.
Revised:  The Broncos, whose "mid-major" Western Athletic Conference is less competitive than the Ducks' Pac-10 Conference, had previously defeated the Ducks in 2008.
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Original: A few seconds after the end of the game, Boise State defensive end Byron Hout taunted Blount and tapped him on the shoulder pad.
Revised: A few seconds after the end of the game, Boise State defensive end Byron Hout taunted Blount and pushed him on the shoulder pad.
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Original:  Broncos Head Coach Chris Petersen had attempted to restrain Hout.
Revised:  Broncos Head Coach Chris Petersen attempted to restrain Hout.
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Original:  The volatile Blount, coming off a 1,000+ yard season in which he broke a franchise record for rushing touchdowns, had struggled in several 2008 games, including the encounter with the Broncos.
Revised:  The volatile Blount, coming off a 1,000+ yard season in which he broke a school record for rushing touchdowns, had struggled in several 2008 games, including the encounter with the Broncos.
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Original: Ken Takeuchi, CEO of JanJan, argued that the OhmyNews model might not work in Japan because of the different "national characters" of Japan and South Korea.
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Original:  Due to these and other problems, Takeuchi argued, JanJan had not yet gained a foothold in the Japanese media landscape, receiving about 2 million pageviews a month in May 2005 and publishing about 15 to 20 articles per day   .
Revised:  Due to these and other problems, Takeuchi argued, JanJan had not yet gained a foothold in the Japanese media landscape, receiving about 2 million pageviews a month in May 2005 and publishing about 15 to 20 articles per day . .
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Original:  Due to these and other problems, Takeuchi argued, JanJan had not yet gained a foothold in the Japanese media landscape, receiving about 2 million pageviews a month in May 2005 and publishing about 15 to 20 articles per day . Ken Takeuchi, CEO of JanJan, argued that the OhmyNews model might not work in Japan because of the different "national characters" of Japan and South Korea .
Revised:  Due to these and other problems, Takeuchi argued, JanJan had not yet gained a foothold in the Japanese media landscape, receiving about 2 million pageviews a month in May 2005 and publishing about 15 to 20 articles per day Ken Takeuchi, CEO of JanJan, argued that the OhmyNews model might not work in Japan because of the different "national characters" of Japan and South Korea .
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Original:  Contributors to both the English and the Korean version receive a small compensation for their work, and the Korean system uses an integrated payment system that has led to donations ("tips") of thousands of dollars to some OhmyNews contributors.
Revised:  Contributors to both the English and the Korean version receive a small compensation for their work, and the Korean edition uses an integrated payment system that has led to donations ("tips") of thousands of dollars to some OhmyNews contributors.
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Original:  The first speaker of the next session was Clyde Bentley, Associate Professor teaching online journalism at the University of Missouri.
Revised:  The first speaker of the next session was Clyde Bentley, Associate Professor for online journalism at the University of Missouri.
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Original:  He emphasized that this project is independent from his work for the Star Tribune, and that it might represent a conflict of interest.
Revised:  He emphasized that this project is independent from his work for the Star Tribune, and that it might be viewed as a conflict of interest.
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Original:  Thurman also argued that "the amounts of user participation that's archived on message boards varies a great deal, you can see with the Daily Mail  there's over a million posts, whereas the Financial Times has barely 10,000." The afternoon sessions focused mostly on the individual stories of OhmyNews citizen reporters from Korea and around the world.
Revised:  Thurman also argued that "the amounts of user participation that's archived on message boards varies a great deal, you can see with the Daily Mail , there's over a million posts, whereas the Financial Times has barely 10,000." The afternoon sessions focused mostly on the individual stories of OhmyNews citizen reporters from Korea and around the world.
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Original:  In the question and answer session, he was asked whether OhmyNews would accept legal liability for stories written by citizen reporters, and took a clear stand in favor of that position: If his team approved a story, he argued, they had a responsibility to make sure that it is correct .
Revised:  In the question and answer session, he was asked whether OhmyNews would accept legal liability for stories written by citizen reporters, and took a clear stand in favor of that position: If his team approved a story, he argued, they had to do everything to make sure that it is correct .
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Original:  Some observers reported that the room had an Orwellianfeel to it.
Revised:  Some observers characterized the atmosphere as "Orwellian"
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Original: One of Thurman's key observations is that many user forums and feedback mechanisms were shut down or strongly restricted due to a perceived lack of control over the nature of the comments published in this way.
Revised: One of Thurman's key observations is that some user forums and feedback mechanisms were shut down or strongly restricted due to a perceived lack of control over the nature of the comments published in this way.
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Original:  Government-funded or non-profit efforts, Thurman observed, are generally more open to the idea of experimenting with user-created content.
Revised:  Government-funded or 'public-service' efforts, Thurman observed, are generally more open to the idea of experimenting with user-created content.
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Original:  These additions can be purchased using a currency called "acorns." Conference attendees had an opportunity to take a closer look at Cyworld in a visit to SK Corporation in Seoul, including a step into the "monitoring room" where Cyworld staff observe the operations of the website.
Revised:  These additions can be purchased using a currency called "acorns." Conference attendees had an opportunity to take a closer look at Cyworld in a visit to SK Communications in Seoul, including a step into the "monitoring room" where Cyworld staff observe the operations of the website.
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Original:  The Wyoming Department of Transportation have commented that there was nothing left of the cab or trailer and the remaining wine Oregon and Washington wine bottles had disappeared overnight
Revised:  The Wyoming Department of Transportation have commented that there was nothing left of the cab or trailer and the remaining bottles of wine from Oregon and Washington wine bottles had disappeared overnight
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Original:  The Wyoming Department of Transportation have commented that there was nothing left of the cab or trailer and the remaining wine Oregon and Washington wine bottles had disappeared overnight
Revised:  The Wyoming Department of Transportation have commented that there was nothing left of the cab or trailer and the remaining wine Oregon and Washington had disappeared overnight
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Original: Wine corks started to burst out of the wreckage and bottles started to smash .
Revised: Wine corks started to burst out of the wreckage as bottles started to smash .
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Original:  The intensity of the fire caused the tyres on the trailer to melt down and the trailer to burn down to its wheel axles, damaging 75 feet of pavement in the process.
Revised:  The intensity of the fire caused the tires on the trailer to melt down and the trailer to burn down to its wheel axles, damaging 75 feet of pavement in the process.
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Original:  In Wamsutter, Wyoming, US, a fire crew were trying to put out a fire of a wine truck on a highway , when they got an unexpected surprise.
Revised:  In Wamsutter, Wyoming, US, a fire crew were trying to put out a fire of a wine truck on a highway when they received an unexpected surprise.
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Original:  Amateur footage also shows a shot was fired  
Revised:  Amateur footage also shows a shot was fired . No-one was injured. 
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Original: Chris Moyles is considered "the saviour of Radio 1".
Revised: Chris Moyles calls himself "the saviour of Radio 1".
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Original:  He equalised the record on Friday beat it on Monday
Revised:  He equalled the record on Friday beat it on Monday
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Original:  Chris has now  2,073 days on the job  .
Revised:  Chris has now clocked up 2,073 days on the job .
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Original:  Chris has now  2,073 days on the job  .
Revised:  Chris has now 2,073 days on the job , and the number is still increasing as the days pass .
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Original:  Chris has now clocked up 2,073 days on the job, and the number is still increasing as the days pass.
Revised:  Moyles has now clocked up 2,073 days on the job, and the number is still increasing as the days pass.
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Original: The chief of the UN' s symposium on climate change commended Hatoyama's plans.
Revised: The chief of the United Nations' symposium on climate change commended Hatoyama's plans.
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Original: Japan has the second largest economy in the world, and  the number-five emitter of greenhouse gases.
Revised: Japan has the second largest economy in the world, and is the number-five emitter of greenhouse gases.
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Original: Prosecutors claimed that the plan targeted seven aeroplanes departing from London's Heathrow airport , each of which could carry from 241 to 285 passengers.
Revised: Prosecutors claimed that the plan targeted seven aeroplanes departing from London's Heathrow Airport , each of which could carry from 241 to 285 passengers.
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Original:  "If they had been successfully deployed, they would have killed thousands of people on board and maybe more if they had detonated them over land," an anonymous senior British police source said   .
Revised:  "If they had been successfully deployed, they would have killed thousands of people on board and maybe more if they had detonated them over land," an anonymous senior British police source said . .
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Original: The plan finalisation is characterised by the Wall Street Journal as follows: He Abdulla Ahmed Ali%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% is thought to have finalized the plans during a six-month trip to Pakistan in 2005, and intended to teach non-Muslims "a lesson that they will never forget."
Revised: The Abdulla Ahmed Ali%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% is thought to have finalized the plans during a six-month trip to Pakistan in 2005, and intended to teach non-Muslims "a lesson that they will never forget."
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Original: The plan finalisation is characterised by the Wall Street Journal as follows: He Abdulla Ahmed Ali%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% is thought to have finalized the plans during a six-month trip to Pakistan in 2005, and intended to teach non-Muslims "a lesson that they will never forget."
Revised: The plan finalisation is characterised by the Wall Street Journal as follows: He %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% is thought to have finalized the plans during a six-month trip to Pakistan in 2005, and intended to teach non-Muslims "a lesson that they will never forget."
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Original: The plan finalisation is characterised by the Wall Street Journal as follows: He Abdulla Ahmed Ali%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% is thought to have finalized the plans during a six-month trip to Pakistan in 2005, and intended to teach non-Muslims "a lesson that they will never forget."
Revised: The plan finalisation is characterised by the Wall Street Journal as follows: He Abdulla Ahmed Ali%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% 
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Original:  The sentencing will commence at a future date
Revised:  sentencing will commence at a future date
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Original: Terry Wogan had infact already been presenting the show from April 1972 to December 1984.
Revised: Wogan had been presenting the show from April 1972 to December 1984.
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Original: Terry Wogan had infact already been presenting the show from April 1972 to December 1984.
Revised: Terry Wogan had infact already been presenting the show since April 1972 to December 1984.
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Original:  But now Terry has decided to quit from BBC Radio 2 in December 2009.
Revised:  Now Terry has decided to quit from BBC Radio 2 in December 2009.
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Original:  But now Terry has decided to quit from BBC Radio 2 in December 2009.
Revised:  But now Terry has decided to retire from BBC Radio 2 in December 2009.
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Original:  But now Terry has decided to quit from BBC Radio 2 in December 2009.
Revised:  But now Terry has decided to quit from BBC Radio 2 in December .
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Original:  While live on air on Monday morning, Wogan said to his listeners : "I wanted to be first to tell you.
Revised:  While live on air on Monday morning, Wogan said to his listeners , "I wanted to be first to tell you.
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Original:  " It's the least I owe you, for endless years, countless hours of morning companionship, friendship, good humour and laughter.
Revised:  It's the least I owe you, for endless years, countless hours of morning companionship, friendship, good humour and laughter.
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Original:  Terry Wogan also announced that his career was not finished altogether .
Revised:  Wogan also announced that his career was not finished altogether .
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Original:  Chris Evans, who will be replacing Terry Wogan as breakfast show DJ, will start in January 2010.
Revised:  Chris Evans, who will be replacing Terry Wogan as he btreakfast show DJ, will start in January 2010.
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Original:  Fans of Terry Wogan - or T.O.G.s (Terry's Old Geezers) as they're commonly referred to - expressed their disappointment about his departure.
Revised:  Fans of Wogan - or T.O.G.s (Terry's Old Geezers) as they're commonly referred to - expressed their disappointment about his departure.
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Original:  Sir Terry Wogan  Wogan had been presenting the show since April 1972 to December 1984.
Revised:  Sir Terry Wogan . Wogan had been presenting the show since April 1972 to December 1984.
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Original: Chris Evans, who will be replacing Terry Wogan as he breakfast show DJ, will start in January 2010.
Revised: Chris Evans, who will be replacing Terry Wogan as the breakfast show DJ, will start in January 2010.
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Original: frame|Image from Taliban site URL The Taliban claim to have shot down the helicopter using a rocket.
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Original: Thirteen bodies have been found at the site where a US helicopter crashed yesterday in Afghanistan.
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Original:  Seven more soldiers are unaccounted for - including soldiers who were fighting on the ground at the time of the crash%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A U.S. official in Washington said on Wednesday said all aboard were presumed dead, although the US military has yet to confirm the news.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A U.S. official in Washington said on Wednesday said all aboard were presumed dead, although the US military has yet to confirm the news.
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Original:  Seven more soldiers are unaccounted for - including soldiers who were fighting on the ground at the time of the crash%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A U.S. official in Washington said on Wednesday said all aboard were presumed dead, although the US military has yet to confirm the news.
Revised:  Seven more soldiers are unaccounted for - including soldiers who were fighting on the ground at the time of the crash%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  It is understood that the CH-47 Chinook was brought down by a rocket-propelled grenade fired by members of the Taleban, as it was carrying soldiers (including US Navy Seals) into the area to fight militants.
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Original:  "It's a search and recovery operation in a tactical environment, which means we have to ensure security throughout," U.S. military spokesman Lieutenant-Colonel Jerry O'Hara said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In other news, the US Department of Defense has announced the death of two soldiers who were killed when their AH-64D Apache attack helicopter crashed in Iraq.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Related new
Revised:  Some losers have die
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Original:  According to the USGS, damage from the initial quake could be "moderate to heavy  "  . At least 10,000 people live within miles of the epicenter
Revised:  According to the USGS, damage from the initial quake could be "moderate to heavy , " . At least 10,000 people live within miles of the epicenter
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Original:  The aftershock was centered in roughly the same exact location and depth and struck minutes later at 3:49 a.m.
Revised:  The aftershock was centered in roughly the same location and depth and struck minutes later at 3:49 a.m.
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Original: Power is reported to be out in many parts of Tskhinvali  .
Revised: Power temporarily went out in many parts of Tskhinvali .
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Original:  According to the USGS, damage from the initial quake could be "moderate to heavy," though no major damage has been reported.
Revised:  According to the USGS, damage from the initial could have been "moderate to heavy," though no major damage has been reported.
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Original:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) , a magnitude 6.2 earthquake  has struck the nation of Georgia.
Revised:  The United States Geological Survey (USGS) , a magnitude 6.2 earthquake has struck the nation of Georgia.
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Original: University defeated Caloundra 38 points to 9 yesterday in their round one Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match in Sippy Downs, Australia .
Revised: defeated 38 points to 9 yesterday in their round one Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match in Sippy Downs, Australia .
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Original: University defeated Caloundra 38 points to 9 yesterday in their round one Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match in Sippy Downs, Australia .
Revised: University defeated Caloundra 38 points to 9 yesterday in their round one match in , .
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Original:  Noosa defeated Maroochydore 55 points to 10 in the round's other result
Revised:  defeated 55 points to 10 in the round's other result
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Original:  The Vietnamese government claims it will cost 58 million dollars to clean up the Danang airport and two other contaminated "hot spots".
Revised:  The Vietnamese government claims it will cost 58 million dollars to clean up the Da Nang airport and two other contaminated "hot spots".
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Original:  The U.S has so far pledged 8 million dollars .
Revised:  The U.S has so far pledged 8 million dollars 
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Original:  The U.S claims that the link between Agent Orange and cancer is not proven
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Original:  The U.S has so far pledged 8 million dollars
Revised:  The U.S has so far pledged 8 million 
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Original: 200px| Handicapped children most of them victims of Agent Orange U.S and Vietnamese officials began meetings in Hanoi on Tuesday to discuss further funding to help victims still suffering from exposure to the chemical Agent Orange.
Revised: 200px| Handicapped children most of them victims of Agent Orange United States and Vietnamese officials began meetings in Hanoi on Tuesday to discuss further funding to help victims still suffering from exposure to the chemical Agent Orange.
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Original:  Officials in Vietnam are requesting more funding from the United States in order to clean up the Da Nang International Airport, a major "hot spot" for Agent Orange.
Revised:  Officials in Vietnam are requesting more funding from the US in order to clean up the Da Nang International Airport, a major "hot spot" for Agent Orange.
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Original:  Vietnamese Vice Minister of Natural Resources and Environment Nguyen Cong claimed  " The committed funds from the US government have not been disbursed."
Revised:  Vietnamese Vice Minister of Natural Resources and Environment Nguyen Cong claimed that " The committed funds from the US government have not been disbursed."
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Original:  Vietnamese Vice Minister of Natural Resources and Environment Nguyen Cong claimed  " The committed funds from the US government have not been disbursed."
Revised:  Vietnamese Vice Minister of Natural Resources and Environment Nguyen Cong claimed " the committed funds from the US government have not been disbursed."
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Original: The very large bomb was found on the side of a road near the village of Forkhill in County Armagh, Northern Ireland, close to the border with the Republic of Ireland , and was defused by an expert bomb disposal team from the Irish Army.
Revised: The bomb was found on the side of a road near the village of Forkhill in County Armagh, Northern Ireland, close to the border with the Republic of Ireland , and was defused by an expert bomb disposal team from the Irish Army.
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Original: The very large bomb was found on the side of a road near the village of Forkhill in County Armagh, Northern Ireland, close to the border with the Republic of Ireland , and was defused by an expert bomb disposal team from the Irish Army.
Revised: The very large bomb was found on the side of a road near the village of Forkhill in County Armagh, Northern Ireland, close to the border with the Republic of Ireland . It was defused by an expert bomb disposal team from the Irish Army.
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Original:   "Their actions were reckless and dangerous in the extreme.
Revised:  " "Their actions were reckless and dangerous in the extreme.
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Original:  " It is only through the hard work and professionalism of police officers and their military colleagues that the area has been made safe . "  20 people had to evacuate their homes while the bomb was defused safely .
Revised:  It is only through the hard work and professionalism of police officers and their military colleagues that the area has been made safe . " 20 people had to evacuate their homes while the bomb was defused safely .
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Original:  " It is only through the hard work and professionalism of police officers and their military colleagues that the area has been made safe . "  20 people had to evacuate their homes while the bomb was defused safely .
Revised:  " It is only through the hard work and professionalism of police officers and their military colleagues that the area has been made safe , " 20 people had to evacuate their homes while the bomb was defused safely .
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