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Original:  Also, the birth is a triumph for Prince Akishiro , who have criticized his elder brother for not trying to give birth to a boy.
Revised:  Prince Akishiro has previously criticized his elder brother for not trying to give birth to a boy.
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Original:  Pressure from The Imperial Household Agency for another child didn't pay off, and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel, to find an alternative succession system.
Revised:  Pressure from the Imperial Household Agency for another child didn't pay off, and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel, to find an alternative succession system.
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Original: Emperor Akihito, presently on a tour of Hokkaido, welcomed the birth.
Revised: Emperor Akihito, currently on a tour of Hokkaido, welcomed the birth.
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Original:  The boy will be the third in the line to succeed to the Japanese throne , after the Crown Prince Naruhito and Prince Akishino, father of the child.
Revised:  The boy will be the third in line to succeed to the Japanese throne , after the Crown Prince Naruhito and Prince Akishino, father of the child.
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Original:  The boy will be the third in the line to succeed to the Japanese throne , after the Crown Prince Naruhito and Prince Akishino, father of the child.
Revised:  The boy will be the third in the line to succeed to the Japanese throne after the Crown Prince Naruhito and Prince Akishino, father of the child.
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Original:  The fact that Crown Princess Masako wasn't able to have a boy to succeed the throne , is suggested to have provoked her depression , and following withdrawal from the public . Pressure from the Imperial Household Agency for another child didn't pay off, and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel , to find an alternative succession system.
Revised:  The fact that Crown Princess Masako wasn't able to have a boy to succeed the throne is thought to have provoked her depression , and following withdrawal from the public . Pressure from the Imperial Household Agency for another child didn't pay off, and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel , to find an alternative succession system.
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Original:  The fact that Crown Princess Masako wasn't able to have a boy to succeed the throne , is suggested to have provoked her depression , and following withdrawal from the public . Pressure from the Imperial Household Agency for another child didn't pay off, and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel , to find an alternative succession system.
Revised:  The fact that Crown Princess Masako wasn't able to have a boy to succeed the throne , is suggested to have provoked her depression and subsequent withdrawal from public activity . Pressure from the Imperial Household Agency for another child didn't pay off, and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel , to find an alternative succession system.
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Original:  The fact that Crown Princess Masako wasn't able to have a boy to succeed the throne , is suggested to have provoked her depression , and following withdrawal from the public . Pressure from the Imperial Household Agency for another child didn't pay off, and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel , to find an alternative succession system.
Revised:  The fact that Crown Princess Masako wasn't able to have a boy to succeed the throne , is suggested to have provoked her depression , and following withdrawal from the public . Pressure from the Imperial Household Agency for another child was ineffective and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel , to find an alternative succession system.
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Original:  The fact that Crown Princess Masako wasn't able to have a boy to succeed the throne , is suggested to have provoked her depression , and following withdrawal from the public . Pressure from the Imperial Household Agency for another child didn't pay off, and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel , to find an alternative succession system.
Revised:  The fact that Crown Princess Masako wasn't able to have a boy to succeed the throne , is suggested to have provoked her depression , and following withdrawal from the public . Pressure from the Imperial Household Agency for another child didn't pay off, and therefore Prime Minister Junichiro Koizumi appointed a panel to find an alternative succession system.
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Original:  About 70\% of Japanese seem to be in favour of the reform, which was postponed sine die when the news of the pregnancy came to the public.
Revised:  About 70\% of Japanese favoured but which was postponed sine die when the news of the pregnancy came to the public.
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Original:  Prince Akishiro has previously criticized his elder brother for not trying to give birth to a boy.
Revised:  Prince Akishiro has previously criticized his elder brother for not trying to sire a boy.
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Original:  According to Crown Prince Naruhito it was in order to protect Crown Princess Masako , while Prince Akishiro puts the good of the nation first .
Revised:  According to Crown Prince Naruhito this was in order to protect Crown Princess Masako , while Prince Akishiro puts the good of the nation first .
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Original:  According to Crown Prince Naruhito it was in order to protect Crown Princess Masako , while Prince Akishiro puts the good of the nation first .
Revised:  According to Crown Prince Naruhito it was in order to protect Crown Princess Masako .
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Original:  At the same time, Princess Kiko have become the darling of the media , while the opposite is the situation for the Crown Princess
Revised:  At the same time, Princess Kiko has become the darling of the media , while the opposite is the situation for the Crown Princess
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Original: Princess Kiko has given birth to a 2,558 kg ( 2.558 kg , or 5.639 pounds ) baby boy, on 6 September at 8 h 27 (Japan Standard Time).
Revised: Princess Kiko has given birth to a 2.558 kg , or 5.639 pounds ) baby boy, on 6 September at 8 h 27 (Japan Standard Time).
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Original: Princess Kiko has given birth to a 2,558 kg ( 2.558 kg , or 5.639 pounds ) baby boy, on 6 September at 8 h 27 (Japan Standard Time).
Revised: Princess Kiko has given birth to a 2,558 kg ( 2.558 kg ( 5.639 pounds ) baby boy, on 6 September at 8 h 27 (Japan Standard Time).
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Original: Princess Kiko has given birth to a 2,558 kg ( 2.558 kg , or 5.639 pounds ) baby boy, on 6 September at 8 h 27 (Japan Standard Time).
Revised: Princess Kiko has given birth to a 2,558 kg ( 2.558 kg , or 5.639 lb ) baby boy, on 6 September at 8 h 27 (Japan Standard Time).
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Original:  Europe - Sony announces launch of PS3 in Europe will be delayed 150px|Sony 's PS3 on display at the E3Sony have announced that they will delay the launch of the Playstation 3 from November 2006 to March 2007.
Revised:  Europe - Sony announces launch of PS3 in Europe will be delayed Sony have announced that they will delay the launch of the Playstation 3 from November 2006 to March 2007.
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Original: __NOTOC__ Sport - Materazzi admits Zidane comment Zidane headbutting Materazzi during the match|150pxMarco Materazzi has told ‘Gazzetta dello Sport ’ exactly what comment he made to Zinedine Zidane that caused him to headbutt the player during the 2006 world cup final.
Revised: __NOTOC__ Sport - Materazzi admits Zidane comment Zidane headbutting Materazzi during the match|150pxMarco Materazzi has told ‘Gazzetta dello Sport ' exactly what comment he made to Zinedine Zidane that caused him to headbutt the player during the 2006 world cup final.
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Original:  Materazzi said “ I was tugging his shirt;
Revised:  Materazzi said " I was tugging his shirt;
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Original:  ” Zidane, who was sent off for the incident, has previously refused to go into detail over what had been said, referring to it as a personal comment about his mother and sister.
Revised:  " Zidane, who was sent off for the incident, has previously refused to go into detail over what had been said, referring to it as a personal comment about his mother and sister.
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Original:  Cameron ’ s car was ahead of the minibus that was involved in the accident and he was not aware of the incident till later.
Revised:  Cameron ' s car was ahead of the minibus that was involved in the accident and he was not aware of the incident till later.
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Original:  Naik ’ s condition was described as “serious” last night as she underwent treatment at the King Edward Memorial Hospital.
Revised:  Naik ' s condition was described as “serious” last night as she underwent treatment at the King Edward Memorial Hospital.
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Original:  Naik ’ s condition was described as “serious” last night as she underwent treatment at the King Edward Memorial Hospital.
Revised:  Naik ’ s condition was described as "serious" last night as she underwent treatment at the King Edward Memorial Hospital.
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Original:  Cameron said he was in shocked by the incident and promised that “ the High Commission will also do all that it can to assist the victim and her family.
Revised:  Cameron said he was in shocked by the incident and promised that " the High Commission will also do all that it can to assist the victim and her family.
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Original:  ” The driver of the minibus was pulled out and beaten by a mob after the incident – a common occurrence in India.
Revised:  " The driver of the minibus was pulled out and beaten by a mob after the incident – a common occurrence in India.
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Original: __NOTOC__ Sport - Materazzi admits Zidane comment Zidane headbutting Materazzi during the match|150pxMarco Materazzi has told ‘Gazzetta dello Sport' exactly what comment he made to Zinedine Zidane that caused him to headbutt the player during the 2006 world cup final.
Revised: __NOTOC__ Sport - Materazzi admits Zidane comment Marco Materazzi has told ‘Gazzetta dello Sport' exactly what comment he made to Zinedine Zidane that caused him to headbutt the player during the 2006 world cup final.
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Original:  The rumours have been circulating after an emergency shutdown of the reactor—known as a SCRAM—at unit 3 of  plant.
Revised:  The rumours have been circulating after an emergency shutdown of the reactor—known as a SCRAM—at unit 3 of the plant.
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Original:  The flight has been delayed multiple times since August 27th  
Revised:  The flight has been delayed multiple times since August 27th . 
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Original: NASA managers have extended their hold on the space shuttle Atlantis' launch until at least Friday, due to a problem in the shuttle's electrical power system.
Revised: NASA managers have extended their hold on the Space Shuttle Atlantis' launch until at least Friday, due to a problem in the shuttle's electrical power system.
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Original:  1 At a 6 p.m. briefing on Wednesday, NASA's STS-115 Mission Management Team announced that because of the fuel cell anomaly it would be prudent to spend another 24 hours to research the issue.
Revised:  At a 6 p.m. briefing on Wednesday, NASA's STS-115 Mission Management Team announced that because of the fuel cell anomaly it would be prudent to spend another 24 hours to research the issue.
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Original:  The management team will meet again at 1 p.m. on Thursday to assess the data gathered about the fuel cell issue and decide whether the launch will take place on Friday .
Revised:  The management team will meet again at 1 p.m. on Thursday to assess the data gathered about the fuel cell issue and decide whether the launch will take place on Friday 
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Original:  The management team will meet again at 1 p.m. on Thursday to assess the data gathered about the fuel cell issue and decide whether the launch will take place on Friday  
Revised:  The management team will meet again at 1 p.m. on Thursday to assess the data gathered about the fuel cell issue and decide whether the launch will take place on Friday . 
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Original: NASA managers have extended their hold on the Space Shuttle Atlantis ' launch until at least Friday, due to a problem in the shuttle's electrical power system.
Revised: NASA managers have extended their hold on the Space Shuttle Atlantis launch until at least Friday, due to a problem in the shuttle's electrical power system.
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Original: Thirty-nine people have received treatment and 30 taken to hospital after a suspected gas leak at Melbourne's Tullamarine airport.
Revised: Thirty-nine people have received treatment and 30 taken to hospital after a suspected at Melbourne's Tullamarine airport.
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Original:  Passengers and employees in the Virgin Blue terminal took ill early morning, reporting vomiting, nausea and difficulty breathing.
Revised:  Passengers and employees in the terminal took ill early morning, reporting vomiting, nausea and difficulty breathing.
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Original:  Passengers and employees in the Virgin Blue terminal took ill early morning, reporting vomiting, nausea and difficulty breathing.
Revised:  Passengers and employees in the Virgin Blue terminal took ill early morning, reporting , and difficulty breathing.
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Original:  The President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf is in Kabul for a two-day visit during which he is scheduled to hold talks with his Afghan counterpart, Hamid Karzai.
Revised: President Pervez Musharraf of Pakistan The President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf is in Kabul for a two-day visit during which he is scheduled to hold talks with his Afghan counterpart, Hamid Karzai.
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Original:  Under it's terms the Pakistan military forces and militants will stop attacks on each other and the militants have agreed to disarm or expel foreign Al-Qaeda-linked fighters in the area.
Revised:  Under its terms the Pakistan military forces and militants will stop attacks on each other and the militants have agreed to disarm or expel foreign Al-Qaeda-linked fighters in the area.
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Original:  Shaukat Sultan told The Associated Press.
Revised:  Shaukat Sultan told the Associated Press.
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Original:  Some 700 more are believed to be surrounded by soldiers in w:Khandahar | Khandahar province.
Revised:  Some 700 more are believed to be surrounded by soldiers in Khandahar province.
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Original:  Hundreds have been killed in contuing fighting between government and international security forces and insurgents in the last four months.
Revised:  Hundreds have been killed in continuing fighting between government and international security forces and insurgents in the last four months.
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Original: Violence continues The visit comes amidst an upsurge in violence in Afghanistan, with US forces asying that 60 militants were killed by artillery and air-strikes on Tuesday.
Revised: Violence continues The visit comes amidst an upsurge in violence in Afghanistan, with US forces saying that 60 militants were killed by artillery and air-strikes on Tuesday.
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Original:  An estimated 1500 families have been displaced by the fighting in Khandahar.
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Original:  Hundreds have been killed in continuing fighting between government and international security forces and insurgents in the last four months   .
Revised:  Hundreds have been killed in continuing fighting between government and international security forces and insurgents in the last four months . .
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Original: President Hamid Karrzai of Afghanistan Karzai meets NATO chief On Wednesday, President Karzai met the NATO General Secretary Jaap de Hoop Scheffer in Kabul and signed an accord aimed at boosting security and development in the country.
Revised: President Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan Karzai meets NATO chief On Wednesday, President Karzai met the NATO General Secretary Jaap de Hoop Scheffer in Kabul and signed an accord aimed at boosting security and development in the country.
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Original:   President Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan Karzai meets NATO chief On Wednesday, President Karzai met the NATO General Secretary Jaap de Hoop Scheffer in Kabul and signed an accord aimed at boosting security and development in the country.
Revised:  Karzai meets NATO chief President Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan Karzai meets NATO chief On Wednesday, President Karzai met the NATO General Secretary Jaap de Hoop Scheffer in Kabul and signed an accord aimed at boosting security and development in the country.
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Original:   President Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan Karzai meets NATO chief On Wednesday, President Karzai met the NATO General Secretary Jaap de Hoop Scheffer in Kabul and signed an accord aimed at boosting security and development in the country.
Revised:  President Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan On Wednesday, President Karzai met the NATO General Secretary Jaap de Hoop Scheffer in Kabul and signed an accord aimed at boosting security and development in the country.
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Original:  Suspected Taliban militants shot dead two muslim clerics in Lashkar Gah, capital of the Helmand province in the last two days and raided a district headquarters in the town of Arghandad in Zabul province  Strained relations Musharraf last visited Afghanistan in 2002.
Revised:  Suspected Taliban militants shot dead two muslim clerics in Lashkar Gah, capital of the Helmand province in the last two days and raided a district headquarters in the town of Arghandad in Zabul province . Strained relations Musharraf last visited Afghanistan in 2002.
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Original:  There is international pressure on Musharraf to deal with Islamist groups in Paksitan who are believed to assist Taliban forces.
Revised:  There is international pressure on Musharraf to deal with Islamist groups in Pakistan who are believed to assist Taliban forces.
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Original:  Pakistan signed a peace agreement with pro-Taliban militants in the North Waziristan region on the eve of the visit.
Revised:  Pakistan signed a peace agreement with pro-Taliban militants in the region on the eve of the visit.
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Original:  Under its terms the Pakistan military forces and militants will stop attacks on each other and the militants have agreed to disarm or expel foreign Al-Qaeda-linked fighters in the area.
Revised:  Under its terms the Pakistan military forces and militants will stop attacks on each other and the militants have agreed to disarm or expel foreign -linked fighters in the area.
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Original:  Some 700 more are believed to be surrounded by soldiers in an operation in Khandahar province.
Revised:  Some 700 more are believed to be surrounded by soldiers in an operation in province.
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Original:  Liberal Democrat leader Sir Menzies Campbell said that  Blair"  should either resign or set a date.  
Revised:  Liberal Democrat leader Sir Menzies Campbell said that Blair" should either resign or set a date. " 
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Original:  Parliamentary Private Secretary are Members of Parliament appointed to assist Cabinet ministers.
Revised:  Parliamentary Private Secretaries are Members of Parliament appointed to assist Cabinet ministers.
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Original: Tony Blair at a 2002 conferenceDemands that the British Prime Minister Tony Blair set a date for his departure as leader of the British Labour Party reached a new level today as seven government members resigned to protest his continued leadership.
Revised: Tony Blair at a 2002 conference Demands that the British Prime Minister Tony Blair set a date for his departure as leader of the British Labour Party reached a new level today as seven government members resigned to protest his continued leadership.
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Original:  Earlier this week at least 14 MPs who were first elected in 2001 and were previously thought loyal to Blair, including Watson and the 6 PPSs, signed a confidential letter to Blair calling on him to publically announce a date for his resignation.
Revised:  Earlier this week at least 14 MPs who were first elected in 2001 and were previously thought loyal to Blair, including Watson and the 6 PPSs, signed a confidential letter to Blair calling on him to publicly announce a date for his resignation.
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Original: w:IsraelIsrael 's air and sea blockade of Lebanon is to end Thursday evening according to a statement issued by the office of Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
Revised: Israel 's air and sea blockade of Lebanon is to end Thursday evening according to a statement issued by the office of Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
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Original:  previously the administration had argued that many of the detainees were illegal combatants and so not subject to the Geneva convention.
Revised:  previously the administration had argued that many of the detainees were "illegal combatants" and so not subject to the Geneva convention.
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Original: European response The European Union is angry at the United States and states that the world is getting unsafer by the American methods to fight terrorism.
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Original:  The European Parliment also protested against so called 'rendition' flights across Europe to transport prisoners to the secret centers.
Revised:  The European Parlement also protested against so called 'rendition' flights across Europe to transport prisoners to the secret centers.
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Original:  The European Parlement also protested against so called 'rendition' flights across Europe to transport prisoners to the secret centers.
Revised:  The European Parliament also protested against so called 'rendition' flights across Europe to transport prisoners to the secret centers.
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Original: 200px|Scott Rush has had his sentence changed to death . Source: ABC 200px|Duc Thanh Nguyen has had his 20 year sentence overturned and now faces death . Source: ABC An additional four members of the Bali Nine, convicted of smuggling heroin into Indonesia will face the death penalty.
Revised: 200px|Scott Rush . Source: ABC 200px|Duc Thanh Nguyen has had his 20 year sentence overturned and now faces death . Source: ABC An additional four members of the Bali Nine, convicted of smuggling heroin into Indonesia will face the death penalty.
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Original: 200px|Scott Rush has had his sentence changed to death . Source: ABC 200px|Duc Thanh Nguyen has had his 20 year sentence overturned and now faces death . Source: ABC An additional four members of the Bali Nine, convicted of smuggling heroin into Indonesia will face the death penalty.
Revised: 200px|Scott Rush has had his sentence changed to death . Source: ABC 200px|Duc Thanh Nguyen . Source: ABC An additional four members of the Bali Nine, convicted of smuggling heroin into Indonesia will face the death penalty.
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Original: Opposing views Physicians Committee for Responsible Medicine (PCRM), an organization that promotes a strictly vegetarian diet for medical reasons , has long stated that the risks of consuming dairy far outweigh the benefits.
Revised: Opposing views Physicians Committee for Responsible Medicine (PCRM), a group of physicians and concerned citizens that promotes a strictly vegetarian diet for medical reasons , has long stated that the risks of consuming dairy far outweigh the benefits.
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