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Original:  The changed course and were hijacked by the pirates off the coast of Oman    
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Original:  The changed course and were hijacked by the pirates off the coast of Oman    
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Original: According to CBS 3, the four Americans taken hostage after their yacht was hijacked by pirates off the coast of Oman in the Indian Ocean , have been killed.
Revised: According to CBS 3, the four Americans taken hostage after their yacht was hijacked by pirates off the coast of Oman in the Indian Ocean have been killed.
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Original:  Reports say they spend some of their time distributing bibles around the world.
Revised:  Reports say they spent some of their time distributing bibles around the world.
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Original:  The changed course and were hijacked by the pirates off the coast of Oman
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Original: According to CBS 3, the four Americans taken hostage after their yacht was hijacked by pirates off the coast of Oman in the Indian Ocean have been killed.
Revised: According to CBS 3, the four Americans taken hostage after their yacht was hijacked by assholes off the coast of Oman in the Indian Ocean have been killed.
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Original:  Pirates hijacked their yacht, named The Quest, on February 18.
Revised:  Assholes hijacked their yacht, named The Quest, on February 18.
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Original:  Naval personnel had been negotiating with pirates when the incident occurred.
Revised:  Naval personnel had been negotiating with assholes when the incident occurred.
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Original:  After boarding the vessel, soldiers killed 2 pirates and detained at least 13 others.
Revised:  After boarding the vessel, soldiers killed 2 assholes and detained at least 13 others.
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Original:  They changed course and were hijacked by the pirates off the coast of Oman
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Original: According to CBS 3 , the four Americans taken hostage after their yacht was hijacked by pirates off the coast of Oman in the Indian Ocean have been killed.
Revised: According to , the four Americans taken hostage after their yacht was hijacked by pirates off the coast of Oman in the Indian Ocean have been killed.
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Original: According to CBS 3 , the four Americans taken hostage after their yacht was hijacked by pirates off the coast of Oman in the Indian Ocean have been killed.
Revised: According to CBS 3 , the four Americans taken hostage after their yacht was hijacked by pirates off the coast of Oman in the have been killed.
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Original:  "Some of these place names, over time, testify to historical events," the press release said.
Revised: The press release notes "Some of these place names, over time, testify to historical events," the press release said.
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Original: The , a public body which is responsible for , cataloguing place names, and suggesting changes to their names, has announced in a press release on Friday that eleven locations in Quebec — whose names contain a racial slur — are to be renamed.
Revised: The , a public body which is responsible for , cataloguing place names, and suggesting changes to their names, has announced in a press release on Friday that eleven locations in Quebec , whose names contain a racial slur — are to be renamed.
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Original: The , a public body which is responsible for , cataloguing place names, and suggesting changes to their names, has announced in a press release on Friday that eleven locations in Quebec — whose names contain a racial slur — are to be renamed.
Revised: The , a public body which is responsible for , cataloguing place names, and suggesting changes to their names, has announced in a press release on Friday that eleven locations in Quebec — whose names contain a racial slur , are to be renamed.
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Original:  The organization has yet to decide on the locations' future names.
Revised:  The organization said they yet to decide on the locations' future names.
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Original:  We want to know their names, just as we know Cartier, Champlain, etc. as markers for real human beings who lived and died in Quebec, rather than as racial or ethnic slurs . " The petition said.
Revised:  We want to know their names, just as we know Cartier, Champlain, etc. as markers for real human beings who lived and died in Quebec, rather than as racial or ethnic slurs " The petition said.
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Original:  We want to know their names, just as we know Cartier, Champlain, etc. as markers for real human beings who lived and died in Quebec, rather than as racial or ethnic slurs . " The petition said.
Revised:  We want to know their names, just as we know Cartier, Champlain, etc. as markers for real human beings who lived and died in Quebec, rather than as racial or ethnic slurs . " , the petition said.
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Original:  The organization said they  yet to decide on the locations' future names.
Revised:  The organization said they have yet to decide on the locations' future names.
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Original:  The report, appearing on the Slovenian tech site "Monitor" , says that users will be able to communicate directly with the site via SMS messages, as well as being able to exchange messages online and having the facility to write on other Facebook users walls.
Revised:  The report, appearing on the Slovenian tech site Monitor , says that users will be able to communicate directly with the site via SMS messages, as well as being able to exchange messages online and having the facility to write on other Facebook users walls.
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Original:  The formal announcement of the technogical breakthrough was made at the Mobile World Congress in Barcelona on the 14th of February . Gemalto's Head of Mobile Business (Facebook), Henri Moissinac, said in a statement "Increasingly people want to be able to stay connected and communicate with their friends on Facebook anytime, anywhere.
Revised:  The formal announcement of the technogical breakthrough was made at the Mobile World Congress in Barcelona on the 14th of February . "Increasingly people want to be able to stay connected and communicate with their friends on Facebook anytime, anywhere.
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Original:  Amsterdam based electronics company Gemalto have announced that they have developed a way of putting Facebook compatibility on to a mobile phone SIM card, to allow mobile phones with no data or internet connection to access the popular social networking site.
Revised:  Amsterdam-based electronics company Gemalto have announced that they have developed a way of putting Facebook compatibility on to a mobile phone SIM card, to allow mobile phones with no data or internet connection to access the popular social networking site.
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Original:  Amsterdam-based electronics company Gemalto have announced that they have developed a way of putting Facebook compatibility on to a mobile phone SIM card, to allow mobile phones with no data or internet connection to access the popular social networking site.
Revised:  Amsterdam-based electronics company Gemalto has announced that it has developed a way of putting Facebook compatibility on to a mobile phone SIM card, to allow mobile phones with no data or internet connection to access the popular social networking site.
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Original: said the school "responded immediately, informing the police and parents of the children involved, and sought appropriate medical attention", and added officials were supporting pupils.
Revised: said the academy "responded immediately, informing the police and parents of the children involved, and sought appropriate medical attention", and added officials were supporting pupils.
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Original: said the academy "responded immediately, informing the police and parents of the children involved, and sought appropriate medical attention", and added officials were supporting pupils.
Revised: said the school "responded immediately, informing the police and parents of the children involved, and sought appropriate medical attention", and added officials were supporting pupils.
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Original: said the school "   responded immediately, informing the police and parents of the children involved, and sought appropriate medical attention", and added officials were supporting pupils.
Revised: stated " responded immediately, informing the police and parents of the children involved, and sought appropriate medical attention", and added officials were supporting pupils.
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Original: said the school "   responded immediately, informing the police and parents of the children involved, and sought appropriate medical attention", and added officials were supporting pupils.
Revised: said the school " t responded immediately, informing the police and parents of the children involved, and sought appropriate medical attention", and added officials were supporting pupils.
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Original: said officers were attending an "ongoing incident " near the secondary school, which has approximately 950 students.
Revised: said officers were attending an incident near the secondary school, which has approximately 950 students.
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Original: Two individuals are in custody after eleven children were injured in a firearms incident near a school , Auchinleck Academy, in East Ayrshire, Scotland, yesterday afternoon.
Revised: Two individuals are in custody after eleven children were injured in a firearms incident near a school Auchinleck Academy, in East Ayrshire, Scotland, yesterday afternoon.
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Original: A week after Shi'ite protesters marched on the capital city of Manama, the Bahrain government informed Formula One Management that it would withdraw from hosting the Bahrain Grand Prix in order to focus on the pressing national issues facing the country.
Revised: A week after Shi'ite protesters marched on the capital city of Manama, the Bahrain government informed Formula One Management that it would withdraw from hosting the Bahrain Grand Prix . The decision was made in an effort to focus on the pressing national issues facing the country.
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Original:  Demonstrators, who are still holding Pearl Square, had threatened to target the race , the opening event of the 2011 Formula One racing season , if the event went ahead as scheduled .
Revised:  Demonstrators, who are still holding Pearl Square, had threatened to target the race , the opening event of the 2011 Formula One racing season .
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Original:  Formula One president and CEO Bernie Ecclestone issued a public statement  , "It is sad that Bahrain has had to withdraw from the race, we wish the whole nation well as they begin to heal their country."
Revised:  Formula One president and CEO Bernie Ecclestone issued a public statement saying , "It is sad that Bahrain has had to withdraw from the race, we wish the whole nation well as they begin to heal their country."
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Original: left A week after Sunni & Shi'ite youth protesters marched on the capital city of Manama, the Bahrain government informed Formula One Management that it would withdraw from hosting the Bahrain Grand Prix .
Revised: left A week after Sunni & Shi'ite youth protesters marched on the capital city of Manama, the Bahrain government informed Formula One Management that it would withdraw from hosting the .
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Original:  The (MRO) spacecraft found evidence of the liquid on the Martian surface, in long dark spots on the Red Planet thought to be formed because of water flow.
Revised:  The spacecraft found evidence of the liquid on the Martian surface, in long dark spots on the Red Planet thought to be formed because of water flow.
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Original:  Warm season flows on slope in On Monday, NASA announced that signs of liquid water has been found on Mars.
Revised:  Warm season flows on slope in On Monday, NASA announced that signs of liquid water have been found on Mars.
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Original: In what Mr. Abbott describes as a "betrayal of the Australian people", Ms. Gillard announced Thursday that a price for carbon will be put back on the national agenda several years before the formation of an emissions trading scheme.
Revised: In what Mr. Abbott describes as a "betrayal of the Australian people", Ms. Gillard announced Thursday that a price for carbon will be put back on the national agenda , for several years, to be followed by the formation of an emissions trading scheme.
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Original:  In the lead up to the 2010 Federal Australian Election, Ms. Gillard claimed that although she plans to implement a green house gas reduction scheme, "[she would] rule out a carbon tax".
Revised:  In the lead up to the 2010 Federal Australian Election, Ms. Gillard claimed that while she might implement a green house gas reduction scheme, "[she would] rule out a carbon tax".
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% OLYMPIA, Wa.--After two machine counts and a manual recount, Secretary of State Sam Reed declared Democrat Christine Gregoire the governor-elect of Washington State.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% After two machine counts and a manual recount, Secretary of State Sam Reed declared Democrat Christine Gregoire the governor-elect of Washington State.
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Original:  Any runoff election would have to be approved by the Legislature, which is controlled by the Democrats . Recount results are available online at www.vote.wa.gov.
Revised:  Any runoff election would have to be approved by the Legislature, which is controlled by the Democrats Recount results are available online at www.vote.wa.gov.
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Original: Assange has been accused of having sex with a woman, during his visit to Stockholm last year, while she was sleeping, without a condom,  without getting her consent.
Revised: Assange has been accused of having sex with a woman, during his visit to Stockholm last year, while she was sleeping, without a condom, and without getting her consent.
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Original: Assange has been accused of having sex with a woman, during his visit to Stockholm last year , while she was sleeping, without a condom, and without getting her consent .
Revised: Assange has been accused of raping a sleeping woman, during his visit to Stockholm last year , while she was sleeping, without a condom, and without getting her consent .
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Original: Assange has been accused of having sex with a woman, during his visit to Stockholm last year , while she was sleeping, without a condom, and without getting her consent .
Revised: Assange has been accused of having sex with a woman, during his visit to Stockholm last year .
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Original: File:Julian Assange (Norway, March 2010).jpg|Assange at the SKUP conference for investigative journalism, Norway, March 2010.
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Original:  Its mission is to deliver and install onto the International Space Station (ISS), the Permanent Multipurpose Module Leonardo, Robonaut2 and the ExPRESS Logistics Carrier-4 and to resupply the ISS . Six astronauts, Steve Lindsey, Eric Boe, Alvin Drew, Nicole Stott, Michael Barratt and Steve Bowen, are participating in the mission.
Revised:  Its mission is to deliver and install onto the International Space Station (ISS), the Permanent Multipurpose Module Leonardo, the ExPRESS Logistics Carrier-4 and to resupply the ISS . Six astronauts, Steve Lindsey, Eric Boe, Alvin Drew, Nicole Stott, Michael Barratt and Steve Bowen, are participating in the mission.
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Original:   The launch comes after a technical problem in the shuttle's computer system caused a short delay shortly before launch , causing liftoff to occur three minutes later than the scheduled time of 4:50 PM.
Revised:  The launch of Discovery, which was supposed to occur at 4:50 PM.
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Original: There was also a minor issue with a tile near the crew hatch that needed to be patched but that did not add additional delay .
Revised: There was also a minor issue with a tile near the crew hatch which needed to be patched but that did not add additional delay .
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Original: There was also a minor issue with a tile near the crew hatch that needed to be patched but that did not add additional delay .
Revised: There was also a minor issue with a tile near the crew hatch that needed to be patched .
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Original:   Robonaut2, a humanoid robot , is also on board the shuttle.
Revised:  The shuttle is also carrying Robonaut2, a humanoid robot , is also on board the shuttle.
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Original:  Discover is the oldest surviving shuttle, and has flown more missions than any other shuttle.
Revised:  Discovery is the oldest surviving shuttle, and has flown more missions than any other shuttle.
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Original:  In mission STS-26 Discovery was the first shuttle to fly after the Challenger disaster and also in mission STS-114 was the first shuttle to fly after the Space Shuttle Columbia disaster.
Revised:  It was also the first shuttle to fly after the Challenger disaster and also in mission STS-114 was the first shuttle to fly after the Space Shuttle Columbia disaster.
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Original:  In mission STS-26 Discovery was the first shuttle to fly after the Challenger disaster and also in mission STS-114 was the first shuttle to fly after the Space Shuttle Columbia disaster.
Revised:  In mission STS-26 Discovery was the first shuttle to fly after the Challenger disaster and was the first shuttle to fly after the Space Shuttle Columbia disaster.
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Original:  Atlantis has one more mission remaining, and if  funding is secured Endeavor will fly once more as well,on STS-135  .
Revised:  Endeavor has one more mission remaining, and if funding is secured Endeavor will fly once more as well,on STS-135 .
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Original:  Atlantis has one more mission remaining, and if  funding is secured Endeavor will fly once more as well,on STS-135  .
Revised:  Atlantis has one more mission remaining, and if funding is secured , Atlantis will also fly once more as well,on STS-135 .
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Original:  ]] upSpace Shuttle Discovery launches on the STS-133 mission. 
Revised:  ]] Space Shuttle Discovery launches on the STS-133 mission. 
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Original: File:Nicolas Sarkozy on October 28, 2010.jpg|French president Nicolas Sarkozy]] French president Nicolas Sarkozy has stated during a news conference that Libya leader Muammar al-Gaddafi "must leave," calling the leader to step down.
Revised: File:Nicolas Sarkozy on October 28, 2010.jpg|French president Nicolas Sarkozy]] French president Nicolas Sarkozy has stated during a news conference that Libyan leader Muammar al-Gaddafi "must leave," calling the leader to step down.
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Original:  ]]  The docking, Discovery'''s 13th and final scheduled docking, occurred two minutes ahead of schedule, being originally scheduled for 19:16 GMT today.
Revised:  ]] The docking, ''Discoverys 13th and final scheduled docking, occurred two minutes ahead of schedule, being originally scheduled for 19:16 GMT today.
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Original:  STS-133 is Space Shuttle Discovery'''s   39th and final scheduled mission into space and the program's 35th mission to the ISS, as well as the 133rd in the entire .
Revised:  During Discovery'''s 39th and final scheduled mission into space and the program's 35th mission to the ISS, as well as the 133rd in the entire .
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Original:  STS-133 is Space Shuttle Discovery'''s   39th and final scheduled mission into space and the program's 35th mission to the ISS, as well as the 133rd in the entire .
Revised:  STS-133 is Space Shuttle Discovery'''s STS-133 is Space Shuttle Discoverys 39th and final scheduled mission into space and the program's 35th mission to the ISS, as well as the 133rd in the entire .
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Original:  From left to right: Alvin Drew, Nicole Stott, Eric Boe, Steven Lindsey, Michael Barratt and Steve Bowen The Space Shuttle Discovery , flying the STS-133 mission, has successfully rendezvoused and docked with the International Space Station (ISS) today at 18:14 UTC for what is scheduled to be the final time in its career.
Revised:  From left to right: Alvin Drew, Nicole Stott, Eric Boe, Steven Lindsey, Michael Barratt and Steve Bowen 
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Original:  Discovery is delivering six astronauts to the orbiting outpost, as well as station parts and supplies including the , the and , the first dexterous humanoid robot in space.
Revised:  Discovery is delivering six astronauts to the orbiting outpost, as well as station parts and supplies including the , the and , the first dexterous humanoid robot in space.
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Original:   Later on today, the crew members are scheduled to move the ExPRESS Logistics Carrier-4 from the payload bay using the shuttle's robotic arm to the station's own robot arm for placement on the exterior of the orbital laboratory.
Revised:  Later on today, crew members and are scheduled to move the ExPRESS Logistics Carrier-4 from the payload bay using the shuttle's robotic arm to the station's own robot arm for placement on the exterior of the orbital laboratory.
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Original:  During Discovery'''s approach to the station earlier on today, the crew of Expedition 26 took pictures of the shuttle's underside from the station's windows in order to assist in analysis of the heat shield of the spacecraft   .
Revised:  During Discovery'''s approach to the station earlier on today, the crew of Expedition 26 took pictures of the shuttle's underside from the station's windows in order to assist in analysis of the heat shield of the spacecraft . .
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Original: NASA officials are debating whether  to extend the mission an additional day for a photo shoot of the International Space Station, as it  currently host to six docked spacecraft from the United States, Russia, Europe, and Japan.
Revised: NASA officials are debating whether or not to extend the mission an additional day for a photo shoot of the International Space Station, as it currently host to six docked spacecraft from the United States, Russia, Europe, and Japan.
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Original: NASA officials are debating whether  to extend the mission an additional day for a photo shoot of the International Space Station, as it  currently host to six docked spacecraft from the United States, Russia, Europe, and Japan.
Revised: NASA officials are debating whether to extend the mission an additional day for a photo shoot of the International Space Station, as it is currently host to six docked spacecraft from the United States, Russia, Europe, and Japan.
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Original: The docking, ''Discoverys 13th and final scheduled docking, occurred two minutes ahead of schedule, being originally scheduled for 19:16 GMT today.
Revised: The docking, ''Discoverys 13th and final scheduled docking, occurred two minutes ahead of schedule, having been originally scheduled for 19:16 GMT today.
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Original:  The hatch between the space shuttle and the ISS was opened at around 20:16 UTC, after which the crew members of welcomed the crew of STS-133 aboard the station.
Revised:  The hatch between the space shuttle and the ISS was opened at 20:16 UTC, after which the crew members of welcomed the crew of STS-133 aboard the station.
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Original:  Initial reports indicate 25 insurgents dead, 1 U.S. troop dead.
Revised:  Initial reports showed 25 insurgents dead, 1 U.S. troop dead.
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