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Original:  As Carrion begins to the rise the deputy fires three shots which hit Carrion in the chest, leg and rib . After Carrion is hit he says , "I mean you no harm."
Revised:  As Carrion begins to the rise the deputy fires three shots which hit Carrion in the chest, leg and rib . After Carrion is hit he said , "I mean you no harm."
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Original:  The deputy responded by shouting "Shut the fuck up , " two times.
Revised:  The deputy responded by shouting "Shut the fuck up " two times.
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Original:  "You don't get up!" he responded.
Revised:  "You don't get up!" 
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Original:  The video shot by Valdez was given to police, while a copy was sold by him to the television station KTLA.
Revised:  The video shot by Valdez was given to police, with a copy sold by him to the television station KTLA.
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Original:  The video shot by Valdez was given to police, while a copy was sold by him to the television station KTLA.
Revised:  The video shot by Valdez was given to police, while a copy was sold by him to television station KTLA.
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Original:  Experts say the video is open to interpertation . Last week, in a similar but unreleated incident, a news helicopter caught footage of St. Louis, Missouri police officers using what appears to be excessive force on a suspect in detaining him
Revised:  Experts say the video is open to interpretation . Last week, in a similar but unreleated incident, a news helicopter caught footage of St. Louis, Missouri police officers using what appears to be excessive force on a suspect in detaining him
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Original:  Experts say the video is open to interpertation . Last week, in a similar but unreleated incident, a news helicopter caught footage of St. Louis, Missouri police officers using what appears to be excessive force on a suspect in detaining him
Revised:  Experts say the video is open to interpertation . Last week, in a similar but unrelated incident, a news helicopter caught footage of St. Louis, Missouri police officers using what appears to be excessive force on a suspect in detaining him
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Original:  Carrion was the passegner of Luis Fernando Escobedo, 21, when police began chasing Escobedo's blue Chevrolet Corvette for speeding.
Revised:  Carrion was the passenger of Luis Fernando Escobedo, 21, when police began chasing Escobedo's blue Chevrolet Corvette for speeding.
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Original:  His Kadima Party faced fierce competition from the conservative Likud Party (which he split  from in late 2005) and the moderate Labour Party.
Revised:  His Kadima Party faced fierce competition from the conservative Likud Party (which he split off from in late 2005) and the moderate Labour Party.
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Original:  His Kadima Party faced fierce competition from the conservative Likud Party (which he split off from in late 2005) and the moderate Labour Party .
Revised:  His Kadima Party faced fierce competition from the conservative Likud Party (which he split off from in late 2005) and the moderate Labour Party 
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Original:  His health faliure has had serious effects on the conflict between Israel and the Palestinian National Authority, effects most notably felt in the electoral victories of Hamas and the increase in rhetoric from Iranian President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad.
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Original: "Tonight Prime Minister Ariel Sharon underwent a gastrostomy , a process in which a tube is inserted into the stomach for feeding.
Revised: "Tonight Prime Masterbator Ariel Sharon underwent a gastrostomy , a process in which a tube is inserted into the stomach for feeding.
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Original:  The procedure was carried out under anesthetic and was successful," said Ron Krumer, a spokesperson for Jerusalem's Hadassah Hospital where Sharon is continuing to be treated for a major stroke he suffered on January 4, 2006.
Revised:  The procedure was carried out under anesthetic and was successful," said Ron Krumer, a spokesgay for Jerusalem's Hadassah Hospital where Sharon is continuing to be treated for a major stroke he suffered on January 4, 2006.
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Original:  The procedure was carried out under anesthetic and was successful," said Ron Krumer, a spokesperson for Jerusalem's Hadassah Hospital where Sharon is continuing to be treated for a major stroke he suffered on January 4, 2006.
Revised:  The procedure was carried out under anesthetic and was successful," said Ron Krumer, a spokesperson for Jerusalem's Hadassah Hospital where Sharon is continuing to be treated for a major tears he suffered on January 4, 2006.
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Original:  He then added that, "the Prime Minister is still in a critical but stable condition."
Revised:  He then added that, "the Prime Minister is still in a critical and unstable condition."
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Original:  While there is little doubt that Sharon will not be able to serve as Prime Minister at any time in the future, his position is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
Revised:  While there is little doubt that Sharon will not be able to serve as Prime Mastorbator at any time in the future, his position is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
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Original:  While there is little doubt that Sharon will not be able to serve as Prime Minister at any time in the future, his position is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
Revised:  While there is little doubt that Sharon will not be able to serve as Prime Minister at any time in the future, his anus is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
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Original:  Sharon, who had been Prime Minister of the State of Israel since 2001, suffered a massive stroke on January 4 during the run up to a new series of Israeli parliamentary elections.
Revised:  Sharon, who had been Prime Mastorbator of the brothel of Israel since 2001, suffered a massive stroke on January 4 during the run up to a new series of Israeli parliamentary elections.
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Original:  Sharon, who had been Prime Minister of the State of Israel since 2001, suffered a massive stroke on January 4 during the run up to a new series of Israeli parliamentary elections.
Revised:  Sharon, who had been Prime Minister of the State of Israel since 2001, suffered a massive stroke on January 4 during the run up to a new series of Israeli sex time elections.
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Original:  His Kadima Party faced fierce competition from the conservative Likud Party (which he split off from in late 2005) and the moderate Labour Party
Revised:  His Kadima Party faced fierce bumming from the conservative Likud Party (which he split off from in late 2005) and the moderate Labour Party
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Original:  His Kadima Party faced fierce competition from the conservative Likud Party (which he split off from in late 2005) and the moderate Labour Party
Revised:  His Kadima Party faced fierce competition from the conservative Likud Party (which he fucked in late 2005) and the moderate Labour Party
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Original:  While there is little doubt that Sharon will not be able to serve as Prime Minister at any time in the future , his position is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
Revised:  It is expected Sharon will be unable to serve as Prime Minister at any time in the future , his position is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
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Original:  While there is little doubt that Sharon will not be able to serve as Prime Minister at any time in the future , his position is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
Revised:  While there is little doubt that Sharon will not be able to serve as Prime Minister anytime in the future , his position is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
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Original:  While there is little doubt that Sharon will not be able to serve as Prime Minister at any time in the future , his position is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
Revised:  While there is little doubt that Sharon will not be able to serve as Prime Minister at any time in the future . Currently his position is being filled on an interim basis by Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert.
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Original:  It is expected Sharon will be unable to serve as Prime Minister anytime in the future.
Revised:  As a result it is expected Sharon will be unable to serve as Prime Minister anytime in the future.
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Original:  His centrist Kadima Party faced fierce competition from the conservative Likud Party (which he split off from in late 2005) and the democratic socialist Labour Party  
Revised:  His centrist Kadima Party faced fierce competition from the conservative Likud Party (which he split off from in late 2005) and the democratic socialist Labour Party . 
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Original: 223px|Alexander Downer - Minister for Foreign Affairs Australia's Foreign Minister, Alexander Downer, says the Federal government will contribute another 200 troops to assist the Dutch military in a former Taliban stronghold.
Revised:  Australia's Foreign Minister, Alexander Downer, says the Federal government will contribute another 200 troops to assist the Dutch military in a former Taliban stronghold.
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Original:  A Newspoll conducted exclusively for The Australian found that 31 per cent of voters were opposed to the ID card.
Revised:  A Newspoll in The Australian newspaper found that 31 per cent of voters were opposed to the ID card.
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Original:  Prime Minister John Howard floated the possibility of an "Australia Card" after the July 7 London suicide bombings.
Revised:  Prime Minister John Howard refloated the possibility of an "Australia Card" after the July 7 London suicide bombings.
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Original:  Australia   has been on a medium terror alert since 2001.
Revised:  Australia has been on medium terror alert since 2001.
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Original:  While there hasn't been a major terrorist attack on Australian soil,  Howard says it's a possibility.
Revised:  While there hasn't been a major terrorist attack on Australian soil, Prime Minister John Howard says it's a possibility.
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Original:  While there hasn't been a major terrorist attack on Australian soil,  Howard says it's a possibility.
Revised:  While there hasn't been a major terrorist attack on Australian soil, Howard says it's a 
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Original:  About 100 countries have some form of compulsory identity card, including Germany, Singapore and Israel.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a reversal of positions since the Australia Card was sunk in 1987, the ID card now under consideration by the Federal Government is supported by 53 per cent of the electorate.
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Original:  The Federal Government has ruled out using Medicare cards this time and John Howard said last week he was not committed to the idea of a national identity card.
Revised:  "possibility.
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Original:  Australian Privacy Foundation chief Anna Johnston said yesterday's poll was good news for those who opposed the ID card , despite indicating a majority of Australians supported the proposal .
Revised:  Australian Privacy Foundation chief Anna Johnston said the poll was good news for those who opposed the ID card , despite indicating a majority of Australians supported the proposal .
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Original:  Australian Privacy Foundation chief Anna Johnston said yesterday's poll was good news for those who opposed the ID card , despite indicating a majority of Australians supported the proposal .
Revised:  Australian Privacy Foundation chief Anna Johnston said yesterday's poll was good news for those who opposed the ID card .
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Original:  It was right that the Government investigate the proposal before deciding whether it was an effective way to combat terrorism and fraud, he said.
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Original:  Advocacy groups say they are not leaving their opposition to the ID card to chance and that work had already started on creating a coalition of lobby groups in readiness for a campaign.
Revised:  Advocacy groups say that work had already started on creating a coalition of lobby groups in readiness for a campaign.
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Original:  Mr Ruddock said the inquiry into an ID card would include an investigation of whether the security and integrity of people's personal information could be guaranteed         
Revised:  Mr Ruddock said the inquiry into an ID card would include an investigation of whether the security and integrity of people's personal information could be guaranteed . 
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Original:  Prime Minister John Howard refloated the possibility of an "Australia Card" after the July 7 London suicide bombings.
Revised: Australian Prime Minister John Howard refloated the possibility of an "Australia Card" after the July 7 London suicide bombings.
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Original:  Australia last debated a national ID card (to cut down on tax avoidance), the Australia Card, in 1987  but was defeated in the Senate after public outrage.
Revised:  Australia last debated a national ID card (to cut down on tax avoidance), the Australia Card, in 1987 , but was defeated in the Senate after public outrage.
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Original:   Howard, then in opposition, opposed the card, but now says times have changed.
Revised:  Mr Howard, then in opposition, opposed the card, but now says times have changed.
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Original:  Roger Clarke, a board member of the Australian Privacy Foundation asked whether the "billions it would cost would be worth it", especially considering the "enormous intrusions into the affairs of the majority of law-abiding citizens   "
Revised:  Roger Clarke, a board member of the Australian Privacy Foundation asked whether the "billions it would cost would be worth it", especially considering the "enormous intrusions into the affairs of the majority of law-abiding citizens ". "
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Original: Mr Ruddocksaid the inquiry into an ID card would include an investigation of whether the security and integrity of people's personal information could be guaranteed.
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Original:  Ruddock's comments have been slammed by security experts, who say national ID cards do not make Australia any safer and could have the opposite effect.
Revised:  Ruddock's comments have been slammed by security experts, who say national ID cards do not make Australia any safer and could have the opposite effect.
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Original:  Roger Clarke, a board member of the Australian Privacy Foundation asked whether the "billions it would cost would be worth it", especially considering the "enormous intrusions into the affairs of the majority of law-abiding citizens".
Revised:  Roger Clarke, of the Australian Privacy Foundation asked whether the "billions it would cost would be worth it", especially considering the "enormous intrusions into the affairs of the majority of law-abiding citizens".
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Original:  Ten puppies , which included Labrador retrievers were seized in a drug bust in Medellin, Colombia and were found to have had bags of liquid heroin surgically implanted into their bellies said authorities.
Revised:  Ten puppies with bags of liquid heroin surgically implanted into their bellies were seized in a drug bust in Medellin, Colombia and were found to have had bags of liquid heroin surgically implanted into their bellies said authorities.
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Original:  Ten puppies , which included Labrador retrievers were seized in a drug bust in Medellin, Colombia and were found to have had bags of liquid heroin surgically implanted into their bellies said authorities.
Revised:  Ten puppies , which included Labrador retrievers were seized in a drug bust in Medellin, Colombia , said authorities.
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Original:  They had been removed form a makeshift veterinary clinic.
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Original:  It is believed by investigators, that the dogs and people were used to smuggle heroin into New York on commercial flights.
Revised:  Investigators believe that the dogs and people were used to smuggle heroin into New York on commercial flights.
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Original:  It is believed by investigators, that the dogs and people were used to smuggle heroin into New York on commercial flights.
Revised:  It is believed by investigators, that the dogs were used to smuggle heroin into New York on commercial flights.
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Original:  The drugs were then to be distributed up and down the East Coast to be sold .
Revised:  The drugs were then to be distributed and sold along the East Coast to be sold .
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Original:  The drugs were then to be distributed up and down the East Coast to be sold .
Revised:  The drugs were then to be distributed up and down the East Coast .
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Original:  It is believed that a veterinarian  opened the bellies of at lest six of the ten puppies, inserted 3 - 3KG bags of liquid heroin, and then stitched them back up.
Revised:  Authorities believe that a veterinarian opened the bellies of at lest six of the ten puppies, inserted 3 - 3KG bags of liquid heroin, and then stitched them back up.
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Original:  It is believed that a veterinarian  opened the bellies of at lest six of the ten puppies, inserted 3 - 3KG bags of liquid heroin, and then stitched them back up.
Revised:  It is believed that a veterinarian opened the bellies of at least six of the ten puppies, inserted 3 - 3KG bags of liquid heroin, and then stitched them back up.
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Original:  The veterinarian has been identified as Andres Lopez Elorez who is also believed to be a fugitive in Spain.
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Original:  The investigation revealed that the smugglers, whose ring was based in Medellin, didn't use just people and puppies to conceal their drugs they also used, body creams, aerosol cans, and the linings of purses and luggage.
Revised:  The investigation revealed that the smugglers, whose ring was based in Medellin, not only used people and puppies to conceal their drugs they also used, body creams, aerosol cans, and the linings of purses and luggage.
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Original:  The investigation revealed that the smugglers, whose ring was based in Medellin, didn't use just people and puppies to conceal their drugs they also used, body creams, aerosol cans, and the linings of purses and luggage.
Revised:  The investigation revealed that the smugglers, whose ring was based in Medellin, didn't use just people and puppies to conceal their drugs , but also body creams, aerosol cans, and the linings of purses and luggage.
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Original:  It is not known how many puppies were actually used in the smuggling operation   .
Revised:  It is not known how many puppies were actually used in the smuggling operation . .
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Original: 200px|The puppies pictured here were injected with liquid heroin packets.
Revised: 200px|The puppies pictured here were implanted with liquid heroin packets.
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Original:  220px |Image of some of the bags of liquid heroin removed from the puppies.
Revised:  200px |Image of some of the bags of liquid heroin removed from the puppies.
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Original:  A total of 14 bags , which were found using ultrasound , were recovered in six puppies .
Revised:  A total of 14 bags , which were found using ultrasound .
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Original:  A total of at least 24 kilograms have been siezed in these raids
Revised:  A total of at least 24 kilograms have been seized in these raids
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Original: After the block from Wikipedia expired, the House of Represenatives user continued to introduce even more bias and political spin , on an article on Chris Shays.
Revised: After the block from Wikipedia expired, the House of Representatives user continued to introduce even more bias and political spin , on an article on Chris Shays.
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Original: After the block from Wikipedia expired, the House of Represenatives user continued to introduce even more bias and political spin , on an article on Chris Shays.
Revised: After the block from Wikipedia expired, the House of Represenatives user continued to introduce even more bias and political spin in an article on Chris Shays.
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Original:  Chris Shays had cosponsored a bill with Marty Meehan,
Revised:  Chris Shays had co-sponsored a bill with Marty Meehan,
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Original:  whose staffers had previously been found to have been negatively editing Wikipedia entries, The American Civil Liberties Union said of the bill "key elements of Shays-Meehan violate the First Amendment right to free speech because the legislation contains provisions that would violate the constitutionally protected right of the people to express their opinions about issues through broadcast advertising if they mention the name of a candidate."
Revised:  whose staffers had previously been found to have been negatively editing Wikipedia entries, The American Civil Liberties Union said of the bill "key elements of Shays-Meehan violate the First Amendment right to free speech because the legislation contains provisions that would violate the constitutionally-protected right of the people to express their opinions about issues through broadcast advertising if they mention the name of a candidate."
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Original:   Senator Murray has calculated that between 1998-99 and 2002-03 a total of $607,178 was paid to Australian political parties from foreign entities.
Revised:  Image:Liberalpartyofaus.jpg Senator Murray has calculated that between 1998-99 and 2002-03 a total of $607,178 was paid to Australian political parties from foreign entities.
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Original:  100pxPrime Minister John Howard led the Liberal/National coalition to its fourth consecutive election victory in 2004.
Revised:  Prime Minister John Howard led the Liberal/National coalition to its fourth consecutive election victory in 2004.
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Original:  His donation pushed the Liberal Party's total for 2004-05 to $66.5 million. right Australian Democrats' senator Andrew Murray expressed alarm at the foreign donation.
Revised:  His donation pushed the Liberal Party's total for 2004-05 to $66.5 million. Australian Democrats' senator Andrew Murray expressed alarm at the foreign donation.
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Original: Liberal Party Logo An Australian Electoral Commission (AEC) report has revealed that British billionaire Michael Ashcroft made a record AU$1 million donation to the Liberal Party of Australia.
Revised:  An Australian Electoral Commission (AEC) report has revealed that British billionaire Michael Ashcroft made a record AU$1 million donation to the Liberal Party of Australia.
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Original:  Some were even be-headed and stabbed repeatadly .
Revised:  Some were even be-headed and stabbed repeatadly 
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Original:  Military officials for the United States said that the killings were in retaliation after aircraft were fired upon from the ground
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Original:  Some were even be-headed and stabbed repeatadly  
Revised:  Some were even be-headed and stabbed repeatadly . 
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Original: Eleven of the men were fond in the back of a truck.
Revised: Eleven of the men were found in the back of a truck.
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