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Original:  Comic artist Jenn St-Onge ( Nancy Drew , Jem and the Misfits) told of being forced to re-evaluate her life, after growing up with ample positive reinforcement about being an artist.
Revised:  Comic artist Jenn St-Onge ( , Jem and the Misfits) told of being forced to re-evaluate her life, after growing up with ample positive reinforcement about being an artist.
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Original:   This week, Hasbro announced that we're  looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in term of our packaging ... we're very much aware that often times plastic is just  ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
Revised:  ... This week, Hasbro announced that we're looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in term of our packaging ... we're very much aware that often times plastic is just ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
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Original:   This week, Hasbro announced that we're  looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in term of our packaging ... we're very much aware that often times plastic is just  ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
Revised:  This week, Hasbro announced that we're ... looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in term of our packaging ... we're very much aware that often times plastic is just ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
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Original:   This week, Hasbro announced that we're  looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in term of our packaging ... we're very much aware that often times plastic is just  ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
Revised:  This week, Hasbro announced that we're looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in terms of our packaging ... we're very much aware that often times plastic is just ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
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Original:   This week, Hasbro announced that we're  looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in term of our packaging ... we're very much aware that often times plastic is just  ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
Revised:  This week, Hasbro announced that we're looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in term of our packaging ... we're very much aware that a lot of times times plastic is ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
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Original:   This week, Hasbro announced that we're  looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in term of our packaging ... we're very much aware that often times plastic is just  ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
Revised:  This week, Hasbro announced that we're looking to switch away from plastic altogether, in term of our packaging ... we're very much aware that often times plastic is just ... ripped off and discarded, so we're constantly trying to improve on that as a company to improve our environmental footprint."
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Original:  But to come back and get that kind of second chance, eight years ago, it feels really good to have people coming to you and being 'I want you to work,' and basically working seven days a week for the last eight years."
Revised:  ... to come back and get that kind of second chance, eight years ago, it feels really good to have people coming to you and being 'I want you to work,' and basically working seven days a week for the last eight years."
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Original:  The popular series is based on a 2011 stage play about a Korean-Canadian family that operates a convenience store.
Revised:  The popular series is based on a 2011 stage play about a family that operates a convenience store.
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Original: A pair of NSW Police Highway patrol vehicles near Albury New South Wales Police have begun their annual holiday Operation Safe Arrival  road safety campaign overnight.
Revised: A pair of NSW Police Highway patrol vehicles near Albury New South Wales Police have begun their holiday Operation Safe Arrival road safety campaign overnight.
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Original: A pair of NSW Police Highway patrol vehicles near Albury New South Wales Police have begun their holiday Operation Safe Arrival holiday road safety campaign overnight.
Revised:  New South Wales Police have begun their holiday Operation Safe Arrival holiday road safety campaign overnight.
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Original: In an attempt to keep the number of deaths on NSW roads at a minimum police will target speeding, seatbelt, helmet and drunk driving offences.
Revised: In an attempt to keep the number of deaths on NSW roads at a minimum police will target speeding, seatbelt, helmet and drink driving offences.
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Original: In an attempt to keep the number of deaths on NSW roads at a minimum police will target speeding, seatbelt, helmet and drink driving offences.
Revised: In an attempt to keep the number of deaths on NSW roads at a minimum police will target speeding, seatbelt, helmet and drunk driving offences.
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Original:  A pair of NSW Police Highway patrol vehicles near Albury The RTA has also begun double demerit points for speeding, seatbelt and helmet offences.
Revised:  The RTA has also begun double demerit points for speeding, seatbelt and helmet offences.
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Original:  According to the New South Wales Roads and Traffic Authority, 495 people have died on NSW roads between January 1 aand December 11.
Revised:  According to the New South Wales Roads and Traffic Authority, 495 people have died on NSW roads between January 1 and December 11.
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Original:  Provisional drivers need to be particularily mindful of these as P1 licence holders (those who have had a licence 12 months or less) can only incur 3 points.
Revised:  Provisional drivers need to be particularly mindful of these as P1 licence holders (those who have had a licence 12 months or less) can only incur 3 points.
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Original:  Provisional drivers need to be particularily mindful of these as P1 licence holders (those who have had a licence 12 months or less) can only incur 3 points.
Revised:  Provisional drivers need to be particularily mindful of these as P1 license holders (those who have had a licence 12 months or less) can only incur 3 points.
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Original:  Provisional drivers need to be particularily mindful of these as P1 licence holders (those who have had a licence 12 months or less) can only incur 3 points.
Revised:  Provisional drivers need to be particularily mindful of these as P1 licence holders (those who have had a license 12 months or less) can only incur 3 points.
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Original:  P2 licence holders (those who have held a licence for 12 to 36 months) have 6 and unrestricted licence holders have 12.
Revised:  P2 license holders (those who have held a licence for 12 to 36 months) have 6 and unrestricted licence holders have 12.
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Original:  P2 licence holders (those who have held a licence for 12 to 36 months) have 6 and unrestricted licence holders have 12.
Revised:  P2 licence holders (those who have held a license for 12 to 36 months) have 6 and unrestricted licence holders have 12.
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Original:  P2 licence holders (those who have held a licence for 12 to 36 months) have 6 and unrestricted licence holders have 12.
Revised:  P2 licence holders (those who have held a licence for 12 to 36 months) have 6 and unrestricted license holders have 12.
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Original:  the NHC advisory indicated Dorian's maximum sustained winds were near 180 (285 )  
Revised:  the NHC advisory indicated Dorian's maximum sustained winds were near 180 (285 ) . 
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Original:  A category 5 hurricane is a form of tropical cyclone.
Revised:  A Category 5 hurricane is a form of tropical cyclone.
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Original:  On the used by the NHC for classifying tropical cyclones, at category 5  "catastrophic damage will occur".
Revised:  On the used by the NHC for classifying tropical cyclones, at Category 5 "catastrophic damage will occur".
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Original:  On the used by the NHC for classifying tropical cyclones, at category 5  "catastrophic damage will occur".
Revised:  On the used by the NHC for classifying tropical cyclones, at category 5 , "catastrophic damage will occur".
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Original:  The wind speed cut-off for category 5 hurricanes is 157 miles per hour (mph);
Revised:  The wind speed cut-off for Category 5 hurricanes is 157 miles per hour (mph);
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Original:  After an initial honorary discharge from  the in 2006, Kokesh was given a general discharge from the in 2007 after images of him wearing his uniform while participating in a protest with the were published in The Washington Post.
Revised:  After an initial honorary discharge from active duty with the in 2006, Kokesh was given a general discharge from the in 2007 after images of him wearing his uniform while participating in a protest with the were published in The Washington Post.
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Original:  Former New York gubernatorial candidate and former Massachusetts governor were both previously considered potential candidates but Sharpe suggested he would not run and Weld has decided to challenge President Donald Trump in the .
Revised:  Former New York gubernatorial candidate and former Massachusetts governor were both previously considered potential candidates but Sharpe suggested he would not run and Weld has decided to run in the , challenging President Donald Trump in the .
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Original:  Former New York gubernatorial candidate and former Massachusetts governor were both previously considered potential candidates but Sharpe suggested he would not run and Weld has decided to challenge President Donald Trump in the .
Revised:  Former New York gubernatorial candidate and former Massachusetts governor were both previously considered potential candidates but Sharpe suggested he would not run and Weld has decided to challenge President Donald Trump .
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Original:  If we can do this - it doesn't matter if it's me or any of the other great potential nominees - we're going to win a lot more votes!
Revised:  If we can do this — it doesn't matter if it's me or any of the other great potential nominees - we're going to win a lot more votes!
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Original:  If we can do this - it doesn't matter if it's me or any of the other great potential nominees - we're going to win a lot more votes!
Revised:  If we can do this - it doesn't matter if it's me or any of the other great potential nominees — we're going to win a lot more votes!
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Original:  Today, the United States Coast Guard suspended their search for survivors in a deadly boat fire which started yesterday near off the coast of California, United States.
Revised:  Today, the (USCG) suspended their search for survivors in a deadly boat fire which started yesterday near off the coast of California, United States.
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Original:  "We know that this is a very difficult time for families and friends of the victims.   
Revised:  "We know that this is a very difficult time for families and friends of the victims. " 
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Original:  CNN, however, reported on a distress call from someone on the Conception named Roger , who may or may not have been the captain.
Revised:  CNN, however, reported on a distress call from someone on the Conception , who may or may not have been the captain.
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Original: The Conception fire at night Today, the (USCG) suspended their search for survivors in a deadly boat fire which started in the very early morning yesterday near off the coast of California, United States  .
Revised: The Conception fire at night A deadly boat fire which started in the very early morning yesterday near off the coast of California, United States .
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Original:  ]  ]  The Conception was owned by Truth Aquatics and chartered by Worldwide Diving Adventures.
Revised:  There was] ] The Conception was owned by Truth Aquatics and chartered by Worldwide Diving Adventures.
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Original:  ]  ]  The Conception was owned by Truth Aquatics and chartered by Worldwide Diving Adventures.
Revised:  ] The dispatcher] The Conception was owned by Truth Aquatics and chartered by Worldwide Diving Adventures.
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Original: Commenting on the radio communications, Captain Rochester said , " There was a lot of adrenaline, a lot of confusion.
Revised: Commenting on the radio communications, Captain Rochester said the situation had " There was a lot of adrenaline, a lot of confusion.
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Original: Commenting on the radio communications, Captain Rochester said , " There was a lot of adrenaline, a lot of confusion.
Revised: Commenting on the radio communications, Captain Rochester said , " a lot of adrenaline, a lot of confusion.
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Original:  [  The dispatcher] was trying to ask for information."
Revised:  [ ... The dispatcher] was trying to ask for information."
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Original:  However, she added, "there are no locked doors in accommodation spaces where passengers slept on the boat. "
Revised:  However, she added, "there are no locked doors in accommodation spaces " where the passengers would have been.
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Original: The USCG called off the search late on Tuesday.
Revised: The (USCG) called off its search late on Tuesday.
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Original: emergency response efforts yesterday  As the slow-moving tropical cyclone known as finally cleared the Bahamas yesterday, the level of destruction left in its wake began to emerge.
Revised: emergency response efforts yesterday . As the slow-moving tropical cyclone known as finally cleared the Bahamas yesterday, the level of destruction left in its wake began to emerge.
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Original:  "We expect that this number will increase", he said .
Revised:  "We expect that this number will increase", he noted .
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Original: Microsoft argues to do this breaches it's intellectual property rights as it would be opening Windows Server up for cloning.
Revised: Microsoft argues to do this breaches its intellectual property rights as it would be opening Windows Server up for cloning.
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Original:  If it's response is not acceptable the fines may be backdated to December 15, 2005.
Revised:  If its response is not acceptable the fines may be backdated to December 15, 2005.
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Original: Windows 2003 Server's desktop On Thursday the European Commission threatened to fine Microsoft €2 Million per day if they continue to fail to comply with a ruling made in March 2004.
Revised: Windows 2003 Server's desktop On Thursday the European Commission threatened to fine Microsoft €2 Million per day if the corporation does not comply with a ruling made in March 2004.
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Original:  If its response is not acceptable the fines may be backdated to December 15, 2005.
Revised:  If its response is not acceptable the fines may be backdated to December 15, 2005 as well.
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Original: Microsoft is alleged to have failed to comply with an order to supply competitors with "interoperability information" for the protocols implemented in Windows Server operating systems.
Revised: The European Commission feels Microsoft has failed to comply with an order to supply competitors with "interoperability information" for the protocols implemented in Windows Server operating systems.
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Original:  In the wake of Pohiva's death, Tonga's was suspended indefinitely according to local media.
Revised:  In the wake of Pohiva's death, was suspended indefinitely according to local media.
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Original: Over the last year, ABC reported that Pohiva was receiving medical treatment in New Zealand for problems with his liver  .
Revised:  ABC reported that Pohiva was receiving medical treatment in New Zealand for problems with his liver .
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Original: Over the last year, ABC reported that Pohiva was receiving medical treatment in New Zealand for problems with his liver  .
Revised: Over the last year, ABC reported that Pohiva received medical treatment in New Zealand for problems with his liver .
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Original:  When he was elected prime minister by the parliament in 2014, he was the first commoner to have done so;
Revised:  When elected prime minister by the parliament in 2014, he was the first commoner to have done so;
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Original:  When he was elected prime minister by the parliament in 2014, he was the first commoner to have done so;
Revised:  When he was elected prime minister by the parliament in 2014, it was the first commoner to have done so;
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Original: The Liberal Party of Canada, the Conservatives  most powerful rival in the election, quickly posted a rebuttal on their website.
Revised: The Liberal Party of Canada, the Conservatives ' most powerful rival in the election, quickly posted a rebuttal on their website.
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Original:  Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in it's most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services (army, air force, navy) involved in a large exercise in the Baffin Islands.
Revised:  Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in its most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services (army, air force, navy) involved in a large exercise in the Baffin Islands.
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Original:  According to the online encyclopedia Wikipedia, trade routes from Europe to the Far East  save 4000 km through the passage, as compared to the current routes through the Panama Canal
Revised:  According to the online encyclopedia Wikipedia, trade routes from Europe to the Far East could save 4000 km through the passage, as compared to the current routes through the Panama Canal
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Original: - including the United States -- that naval vessels traveling in Canadian territorial waters will require the consent of the government of Canada," Harper stated.
Revised: - including the United States — that naval vessels traveling in Canadian territorial waters will require the consent of the government of Canada," Harper stated.
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Original:  The Liberal Party of Canada , the Conservatives' most powerful rival in the election, quickly posted a rebuttal on their website.
Revised:  The , the Conservatives' most powerful rival in the election, quickly posted a rebuttal on their website.
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Original:  According to the online encyclopedia Wikipedia ,
Revised:  According to the online encyclopedia ,
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Original:  trade routes from Europe to the Far East could save 4000 km through the passage,
Revised:  trade routes from to the could save 4000 km through the passage,
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Original:  trade routes from Europe to the Far East could save 4000 km through the passage,
Revised:  trade routes from Europe to the Far East could save 4000 through the passage,
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Original:  as compared to the current routes through the Panama Canal Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in its most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services ( army, air force, navy ) involved in a large exercise in the Baffin Islands . Canadians are scheduled to go to the polls on January 23, 2006 in an early election as a result of a non-confidence motion in parliament against the former ruling Liberal party
Revised:  as compared to the current routes through the . Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in its most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services ( army, air force, navy ) involved in a large exercise in the Baffin Islands . Canadians are scheduled to go to the polls on January 23, 2006 in an early election as a result of a non-confidence motion in parliament against the former ruling Liberal party
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Original:  as compared to the current routes through the Panama Canal Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in its most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services ( army, air force, navy ) involved in a large exercise in the Baffin Islands . Canadians are scheduled to go to the polls on January 23, 2006 in an early election as a result of a non-confidence motion in parliament against the former ruling Liberal party
Revised:  as compared to the current routes through the Panama Canal Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in its most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services ( , , ) involved in a large exercise in the Baffin Islands . Canadians are scheduled to go to the polls on January 23, 2006 in an early election as a result of a non-confidence motion in parliament against the former ruling Liberal party
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Original:  as compared to the current routes through the Panama Canal Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in its most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services ( army, air force, navy ) involved in a large exercise in the Baffin Islands . Canadians are scheduled to go to the polls on January 23, 2006 in an early election as a result of a non-confidence motion in parliament against the former ruling Liberal party
Revised:  as compared to the current routes through the Panama Canal Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in its most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services ( army, air force, navy ) involved in a large exercise in the . Canadians are scheduled to go to the polls on January 23, 2006 in an early election as a result of a non-confidence motion in parliament against the former ruling Liberal party
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Original:  as compared to the current routes through the Panama Canal Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in its most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services ( army, air force, navy ) involved in a large exercise in the Baffin Islands . Canadians are scheduled to go to the polls on January 23, 2006 in an early election as a result of a non-confidence motion in parliament against the former ruling Liberal party
Revised:  as compared to the current routes through the Panama Canal Canada last flexed its muscle in the Arctic in 2004 in its most massive Arctic exercise ever, with six hundred personnel from the three services ( army, air force, navy ) involved in a large exercise in the Baffin Islands . Canadians are scheduled to go to the polls on January 23, 2006 in an early election as a result of a motion in parliament against the former ruling Liberal party
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Original: The NHC's " Hurricane Humberto Advisory Number 14 " , released at 11:00 p.m. EDT on Sunday (0300 UTC Monday morning) placed Humberto 785 miles (1260 kilometers) west of Bermuda.
Revised: The NHC's Hurricane Humberto Advisory Number 14 " , released at 11:00 p.m. EDT on Sunday (0300 UTC Monday morning) placed Humberto 785 miles (1260 kilometers) west of Bermuda.
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