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Original:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham to the bishop of Ross, who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, 'composed others of a less incriminating character to be laid before Lord Burghley.
Revised:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham to the Bishop of Ross, who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, 'composed others of a less incriminating character to be laid before Lord Burghley.
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Original:   — Charles Bailly.'
Revised:  | — Charles Bailly.'
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Original: Charles Baillie, or Bailly (1542–1625), was a  member of the household of Mary, Queen of Scots . Baillie was by birth a Fleming, though by descent a Scot.
Revised: Charles Baillie, or Bailly (1542–1625), was a member of the household of Mary, Queen of Scots Baillie was by birth a Fleming, though by descent a Scot.
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Original:  In all probability he was from the beginning a papal agent, and having the mastery of several European languages he was, after the imprisonment of Mary , employed in fomenting foreign plots on her behalf.
Revised:  In all probability he was from the beginning a papal agent, and having the mastery of several European languages he was, after Mary's imprisonment , employed in fomenting foreign plots on her behalf.
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Original:  In all probability he was from the beginning a papal agent, and having the mastery of several European languages he was, after the imprisonment of Mary , employed in fomenting foreign plots on her behalf.
Revised:  In all probability he was from the beginning a papal agent, and having the mastery of several European languages he was, after the imprisonment of Mary , employed in carrying out foreign plots on her behalf.
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Original:   In the spring of 1571 he was about to leave Flanders with copies , which he had got printed at the Liège press, of a book by the Bishop of Ross in defence of Queen Mary,A defence of the honour of Marie Quene of Scotlande, 1569  when Roberto di Ridolfi, the agent of Pope Pius V, entrusted him with letters in cipher for the queen, and also for the Spanish ambassador, the Duke of Norfolk, the Bishop of Ross, and Lord Lumley.
Revised:  In the spring of 1571 he was about to leave Flanders with copies of a book by the Bishop of Ross in defence of Queen Mary,A defence of the honour of Marie Quene of Scotlande, 1569 when Roberto di Ridolfi, the agent of Pope Pius V, entrusted him with letters in cipher for the queen, and also for the Spanish ambassador, the Duke of Norfolk, the Bishop of Ross, and Lord Lumley.
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Original:   In the spring of 1571 he was about to leave Flanders with copies , which he had got printed at the Liège press, of a book by the Bishop of Ross in defence of Queen Mary,A defence of the honour of Marie Quene of Scotlande, 1569  when Roberto di Ridolfi, the agent of Pope Pius V, entrusted him with letters in cipher for the queen, and also for the Spanish ambassador, the Duke of Norfolk, the Bishop of Ross, and Lord Lumley.
Revised:  In the spring of 1571 he was about to leave Flanders with copies , which he had got printed at the Liège press, of a book by the bishop of Ross in defence of Queen Mary,A defence of the honour of Marie Quene of Scotlande, 1569 when Roberto di Ridolfi, the agent of Pope Pius V, entrusted him with letters in cipher for the queen, and also for the Spanish ambassador, the Duke of Norfolk, the Bishop of Ross, and Lord Lumley.
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Original:   In the spring of 1571 he was about to leave Flanders with copies , which he had got printed at the Liège press, of a book by the Bishop of Ross in defence of Queen Mary,A defence of the honour of Marie Quene of Scotlande, 1569  when Roberto di Ridolfi, the agent of Pope Pius V, entrusted him with letters in cipher for the queen, and also for the Spanish ambassador, the Duke of Norfolk, the Bishop of Ross, and Lord Lumley.
Revised:  In the spring of 1571 he was about to leave Flanders with copies , which he had got printed at the Liège press, of a book by the Bishop of Ross in defence of Queen Mary,A defence of the honour of Marie Quene of Scotlande, 1569 which he had got printed at the Liège press, when Roberto di Ridolfi, the agent of Pope Pius V, entrusted him with letters in cipher for the queen, and also for the Spanish ambassador, the Duke of Norfolk, the Bishop of Ross, and Lord Lumley.
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Original:  They described a plan for a Spanish landing on behalf of Mary in the eastern counties of England.
Revised:  They described a plan for a Spanish landing on Mary's behalf in the eastern counties of England.
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Original:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham to the Bishop of Ross, who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, 'composed others of a less incriminating character to be laid before Lord Burghley  .
Revised:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham to the bishop of Ross, who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, 'composed others of a less incriminating character to be laid before Lord Burghley .
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Original:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham to the Bishop of Ross, who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, 'composed others of a less incriminating character to be laid before Lord Burghley  .
Revised:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham to the Bishop of Ross, who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, composed other letters of a less incriminating character to be laid before Lord Burghley .
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Original:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham to the Bishop of Ross, who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, 'composed others of a less incriminating character to be laid before Lord Burghley  .
Revised:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham to the Bishop of Ross, who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, 'composed others of a less incriminating nature to be laid before Lord Burghley .
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Original:  The scheme might have been successful had not Burghley made use of a traitor, named Thomas Herle, to gain the confidence of Baillie, whom Herle describes as ' fearful, full of words, glorious, and given to the cup, a man easily read .' Herle had also gained the confidence of the bishop, and a complete exposure of the whole plot was imminent when an indiscretion on the part of Herle convinced Baillie that he was betrayed.
Revised:  The scheme might have been successful had Burghley not made use of a traitor, named Thomas Herle, to gain the confidence of Baillie, whom Herle describes as ' fearful, full of words, glorious, and given to the cup, a man easily read .' Herle had also gained the confidence of the bishop, and a complete exposure of the whole plot was imminent when an indiscretion on the part of Herle convinced Baillie that he was betrayed.
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Original:  The scheme might have been successful had not Burghley made use of a traitor, named Thomas Herle, to gain the confidence of Baillie, whom Herle describes as ' fearful, full of words, glorious, and given to the cup, a man easily read .' Herle had also gained the confidence of the bishop, and a complete exposure of the whole plot was imminent when an indiscretion on the part of Herle convinced Baillie that he was betrayed.
Revised:  The scheme might have been successful had not Burghley made use of a traitor, named Thomas Herle, to gain Baillie's confidence. Herle described Baillie as " fearful, full of words, glorious, and given to the cup, a man easily read .' Herle had also gained the confidence of the bishop, and a complete exposure of the whole plot was imminent when an indiscretion on the part of Herle convinced Baillie that he was betrayed.
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Original:  The scheme might have been successful had not Burghley made use of a traitor, named Thomas Herle, to gain the confidence of Baillie, whom Herle describes as ' fearful, full of words, glorious, and given to the cup, a man easily read .' Herle had also gained the confidence of the bishop, and a complete exposure of the whole plot was imminent when an indiscretion on the part of Herle convinced Baillie that he was betrayed.
Revised:  The scheme might have been successful had not Burghley made use of a traitor, named Thomas Herle, to gain the confidence of Baillie, whom Herle describes as ' fearful, full of words, glorious, and given to the cup, a man easily read .' Herle had also gained the confidence of the bishop, and a complete exposure of the whole plot was imminent when an indiscretion on Herle's part convinced Baillie that he was betrayed.
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Original:  He endeavoured to warn the bishop by a letter, but it was intercepted, and Baillie was conveyed to the Tower , where, on his declining to read the cipher of the letters, he was put on the rack.
Revised:  He endeavoured to warn the bishop by a letter, but it was intercepted, and Baillie was conveyed to the Tower of London, where he refused to read the cipher of the letters, he was put on the rack.
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Original:  He endeavoured to warn the bishop by a letter, but it was intercepted, and Baillie was conveyed to the Tower , where, on his declining to read the cipher of the letters, he was put on the rack.
Revised:  He endeavoured to warn the bishop by a letter, but it was intercepted, and Baillie was conveyed to the Tower , where, on his declining to read the cipher of the letters, and was put on the rack.
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Original:  The following inscription, still visible on the walls, records his reflections inspired by the situation: ' L. H. S. 1571 die 10 Aprilis.
Revised:  The following inscription, still visible on the walls, records his reflections inspired by the situation: " L. H. S. 1571 die 10 Aprilis.
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Original:  ' These sound maxims he seems to have forgotten as soon as he had written them.
Revised:  "
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Original:  One night there appeared at his bedside the figure of a man who said that he was Dr. Story, whom Baillie knew to be in the Tower awaiting execution.
Revised:  One night , the figure of a man who said that he was Dr. Story, whom Baillie knew to be in the Tower awaiting execution.
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Original:  One night there appeared at his bedside the figure of a man who said that he was Dr. Story, whom Baillie knew to be in the Tower awaiting execution.
Revised:  One night there appeared at his bedside the figure of a man appeared at Baillie's bedside. He claimed to be Dr. Story, whom Baillie knew to be in the Tower awaiting execution.
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Original:  In reality the figure was that of a traitor of the name of Parker ;
Revised:  In reality the figure was that of a traitor of the name of Parker ,
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Original:  On the advice of Parker he endeavoured to gain credit with Burghley by deciphering the substituted letters of the bishop of Ross.
Revised:  On Parker's advice he endeavoured to gain credit with Burghley by deciphering the substituted letters of the bishop of Ross.
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Original:  In all probability Baillie received his liberty about the same time as the bishop of Ross, in 1573.
Revised:  Later life and death Baillie probably received his liberty about the same time as the bishop of Ross, in 1573.
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Original:   He died 27 December 1625 in his 85th year, and was interred in the churchyard of Hulpe, a village near Brussels, where, in the inscription on his tombstone, he is designated as ' Sir Charles Bailly, secretaire de la Royne d'Ecosse decapitée pour la foy catholiq. '
Revised:  He died 27 December 1625 , aged 85, and was interred in the churchyard of Hulpe, a village near Brussels, where, in the inscription on his tombstone, he is designated as ' Sir Charles Bailly, secretaire de la Royne d'Ecosse decapitée pour la foy catholiq. '
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Original:   He died 27 December 1625 in his 85th year, and was interred in the churchyard of Hulpe, a village near Brussels, where, in the inscription on his tombstone, he is designated as ' Sir Charles Bailly, secretaire de la Royne d'Ecosse decapitée pour la foy catholiq. '
Revised:  He died 27 December 1625 in his 85th year, and was interred in the churchyard of Hulpe, a village near Brussels, where, in the inscription on his tombstone, he is designated as " Sir Charles Bailly, secretaire de la Royne d'Ecosse decapitée pour la foy catholiq. '
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Original:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham Citation needed to the bishop of Ross Citation needed , who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, composed other letters of a less incriminating nature to be laid before William Cecil (later Lord Burghley), Queen Elizabeth I's chief advisor.
Revised:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham to the bishop of Ross Citation needed , who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, composed other letters of a less incriminating nature to be laid before William Cecil (later Lord Burghley), Queen Elizabeth I's chief advisor.
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Original:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham Citation needed to the bishop of Ross Citation needed , who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, composed other letters of a less incriminating nature to be laid before William Cecil (later Lord Burghley), Queen Elizabeth I's chief advisor.
Revised:  The letters were, however, conveyed in secret by Lord Cobham Citation needed to the bishop of Ross , who, with the help of the Spanish ambassador, composed other letters of a less incriminating nature to be laid before William Cecil (later Lord Burghley), Queen Elizabeth I's chief advisor.
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Original: REDIRECT Sociotropía La Sociotropía es un tipo de personalidad que se caracteriza por invertir excesivamente en relaciones interpersonales, y por lo general la estudia el área de la psicología social . Las personas que padecen de sociotropía suelen tener una gran necesidad de aceptación social , la cual las lleva a ser extremadamente afectuosas con personas con las cuales no tienen relaciones cercanas.
Revised: Sociotropy is a personality trait characterized by excessive investment in interpersonal relationships and usually studied in the field of social psychology. La Sociotropía es un tipo de personalidad que se caracteriza por invertir excesivamente en relaciones interpersonales, y por lo general la estudia el área de la psicología social . Las personas que padecen de sociotropía suelen tener una gran necesidad de aceptación social , la cual las lleva a ser extremadamente afectuosas con personas con las cuales no tienen relaciones cercanas.
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Original: REDIRECT Sociotropía La Sociotropía es un tipo de personalidad que se caracteriza por invertir excesivamente en relaciones interpersonales, y por lo general la estudia el área de la psicología social . Las personas que padecen de sociotropía suelen tener una gran necesidad de aceptación social , la cual las lleva a ser extremadamente afectuosas con personas con las cuales no tienen relaciones cercanas.
Revised: REDIRECT Sociotropía People with sociotropy tend to have a strong need for social acceptance, which causes them to be overly nurturant towards people who they do not have close relationships with. Sociotropy can be seen as the opposite of autonomy, because those with sociotropy are concerned with interpersonal relationships, whereas those with autonomy are more concerned with independence and do not care so much for others. Sociotropy has been correlated with feminine sex-role orientation in many research experiments . Las personas que padecen de sociotropía suelen tener una gran necesidad de aceptación social , la cual las lleva a ser extremadamente afectuosas con personas con las cuales no tienen relaciones cercanas.
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Original:  Cabe destacar que la sociotropía tiene relación con el estrés interpersonal o experiencias traumáticas que pueden generar depresión posterior.
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Original:  Basándose en la psicometría, una muestra de 378 preguntas dirigidas a pacientes psiquiátricos se situaron en una estructura de dos factores, en la que el conteo final de los ítems fue de 60-109.
Revised:  Basándose en la psicometría, una muestra de 378 psychiatric patients questions were placed into a two-factor structure where the final pool of items was 60-109.
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Original:  De ahí cada uno de las 30 ítems generó tres factores para la sociotropía: preocupación por la desaprobación, preocupación por el acercamiento / unión / separación de los demás, y complacencia hacia los demás, y para la autonomía los tres siguientes: desempeño autónomo e individual, alejamiento/libertad del control de los demás, y preferencia por la soledad.
Revised:  From there each 30 ítems generó tres factores para la sociotropía: preocupación por la desaprobación, preocupación por el acercamiento / unión / separación de los demás, y complacencia hacia los demás, y para la autonomía los tres siguientes: desempeño autónomo e individual, alejamiento/libertad del control de los demás, y preferencia por la soledad.
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Original:  De ahí cada uno de las 30 ítems generó tres factores para la sociotropía: preocupación por la desaprobación, preocupación por el acercamiento / unión / separación de los demás, y complacencia hacia los demás, y para la autonomía los tres siguientes: desempeño autónomo e individual, alejamiento/libertad del control de los demás, y preferencia por la soledad.
Revised:  De ahí cada uno de las 30 items generated three factors for sociotropy: Concern About Disapproval, Attachment / unión / separación de los demás, y complacencia hacia los demás, y para la autonomía los tres siguientes: desempeño autónomo e individual, alejamiento/libertad del control de los demás, y preferencia por la soledad.
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Original:  El SAS tiene 60 ítems clasificados en una escala de 5 puntos (de 0 a 4).
Revised:  El SAS tiene 60 items rated on a 5-point scale (ranging from 0 a 4).
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Original:  El SAS tiene 60 ítems clasificados en una escala de 5 puntos (de 0 a 4).
Revised:  El SAS tiene 60 ítems clasificados en una escala de 5 puntos (de 0 to 4).
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Original:  y la conectividad es una sensibilidad hacia los demás, y se asocia a la valoración de las relaciones . Desde que se desarrolló la SAS, se han diseñado varios instrumentos de medición de constructos de la personalidad para evaluar otros rasgos de la personalidad, y si bien algunos de ellos coinciden con la SAS, son analizados con el fin de encontrar características diferentes .
Revised:  y la conectividad es una sensibilidad hacia los demás, y se asocia a la valoración de las relaciones . Since the development of the SAS, many other measures of personality constructs have been developed to assess other personality traits with some overlapping with the SAS, but examining for different traits .
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Original:  A menudo se plantea que esto se debe a que el individuo intenta obtener aprobación social y evitar el rechazo social . Esta presión social y dependencia pueden causar una pérdida del autocontrol en la persona, especialmente si esta no está consciente de su deseo de aceptación social . Depresión Gran parte de las investigaciones sobre la sociotropía se enfocan en la conexión entre la personalidad y el riesgo a la depresión.
Revised:  A menudo se plantea que esto se debe a que el individuo intenta obtener aprobación social y evitar el rechazo social . Depresión Gran parte de las investigaciones sobre la sociotropía se enfocan en la conexión entre la personalidad y el riesgo a la depresión.
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Original:  La sociotropía y la ansiedad están presentes en estas situaciones porque son sociales por definición y, por lo tanto, están asociadas con énfasis en relaciones sociales que son características de individuos sociotrópico   
Revised:  La sociotropía y la ansiedad están presentes en estas situaciones porque son sociales por definición y, por lo tanto, están asociadas con énfasis en relaciones sociales que son características de individuos sociotrópico References 
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Original: Sociotropy is a personality trait characterized by excessive investment in interpersonal relationships and usually studied in the field of socialpsychology .
Revised: La Sociotropía es un tipo de personalidad que se caracteriza por invertir excesivamente en relaciones interpersonales, y por lo general la estudia el área de la psicología social .
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Original:  Lawrence Erlbaum Associates, Inc. Retrieved December 11, 2011 Sociotropy-Autonomy Scale The Sociotropy-Autonomy Scale (SAS) was introduced by Aaron T. Beck as a means of assessing two cognitive-personality constructs hypothesized as risk factors in depression.
Revised:  Lawrence Erlbaum Associates, Inc. Retrieved December 11, 2011 Sociotropy-Autonomy Scale The Sociotropy-Autonomy Scale (SAS) Aaron T. Beck as a means of assessing two cognitive-personality constructs hypothesized as risk factors in depression.
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Original:  Using psychometrics, from the sample of 378 psychiatric patients questions were placed into a two-factor structure where the final pool of items was 60-109.
Revised:  Using psychometrics, from the sample of 378 preguntas dirigidas a pacientes psiquiátricos se situaron en una estructura de dos factores, en la que el conteo final de los ítems fue de 60-109.
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Original:  From there each 30 items generated three factors for sociotropy: Concern About Disapproval, Attachment / Cocern About Separation, and Pleasing Others;
Revised:  De ahí cada uno de las 30 items generated three factors for sociotropy: Concern About Disapproval, Attachment / Cocern About Separation, and Pleasing Others;
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Original:  From there each 30 items generated three factors for sociotropy: Concern About Disapproval, Attachment / Cocern About Separation, and Pleasing Others;
Revised:  From there each 30 ítems generó tres factores para la sociotropía: preocupación por la desaprobación, preocupación por el acercamiento / Cocern About Separation, and Pleasing Others;
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Original:  The SAS has 60 items rated on a 5-point scale (ranging from 0 to 4).
Revised:  The SAS has 60 ítems clasificados en una escala de 5 puntos (de 0 to 4).
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Original:  The SAS has 60 items rated on a 5-point scale (ranging from 0 to 4).
Revised:  The SAS has 60 items rated on a 5-point scale (ranging from 0 a 4).
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Original:  Neediness is associated with the symptoms of depression—and connectedness is a sensitivity towards others, and associated with valuing relationships . Since the development of the SAS, many other measures of personality constructs have been developed to assess other personality traits with some overlapping with the SAS, but examining for different traits . Self-control Sociotropic individuals react differently when faced with situations that involve self-control.
Revised:  Neediness is associated with the symptoms of depression—and connectedness is a sensitivity towards others, and associated with valuing relationships . Desde que se desarrolló la SAS, se han diseñado varios instrumentos de medición de constructos de la personalidad para evaluar otros rasgos de la personalidad, y si bien algunos de ellos coinciden con la SAS, son analizados con el fin de encontrar características diferentes . Self-control Sociotropic individuals react differently when faced with situations that involve self-control.
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