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Original:  The Sultan's Armed Forces (SAF) were by and large under the control of British commanders, including Colonel Hugh Oldman , who commanded the Sultan's troops in Muscat, and Brigadier John Graham who was the overall commander of the SAF.
Revised:  The Sultan's Armed Forces (SAF) were by and large under the control of British commanders, including Colonel Hugh Oldman commanded the Sultan's troops in Muscat, and Brigadier John Graham who was the overall commander of the SAF.
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Original:  The Sultan's Armed Forces (SAF) were by and large under the control of British commanders, including Colonel Hugh Oldman , who commanded the Sultan's troops in Muscat, and Brigadier John Graham who was the overall commander of the SAF.
Revised:  The Sultan's Armed Forces (SAF) were by and large under the control of British commanders, including Colonel Hugh Oldman , who commanded the Sultan's troops in Muscat, while Brigadier John Graham who was the overall commander of the SAF.
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Original:  The Sultan's Armed Forces (SAF) were by and large under the control of British commanders, including Colonel Hugh Oldman , who commanded the Sultan's troops in Muscat, and Brigadier John Graham who was the overall commander of the SAF.
Revised:  The Sultan's Armed Forces (SAF) were by and large under the control of British commanders, including Colonel Hugh Oldman , who commanded the Sultan's troops in Muscat, and Brigadier John Graham was the overall commander of the SAF.
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Original:  Sultan bin Taimur's poor leadership of the country and overreliance on British military support aggravated the British government  who began to view Taimur's deposition as the only viable way to defeating Oman's growing communist insurgency and gave way to the 1970 coup . British officials contacted the Sultan's son,
Revised:  Sultan bin Taimur's poor leadership of the country and overreliance on British military support aggravated the British government , who began to view Taimur's deposition as the only viable way to defeating Oman's growing communist insurgency and gave way to the 1970 coup . British officials contacted the Sultan's son,
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Original:  Sultan bin Taimur's poor leadership of the country and overreliance on British military support aggravated the British government  who began to view Taimur's deposition as the only viable way to defeating Oman's growing communist insurgency and gave way to the 1970 coup . British officials contacted the Sultan's son,
Revised:  Sultan bin Taimur's poor leadership of the country and overreliance on British military support aggravated the British government who began to view Taimur's deposition as the only viable way to defeating Oman's growing communist insurgency . British officials contacted the Sultan's son,
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Original:  On 23 July 1970, Qaboos bin Said al Said, the Sultan's 29-year-old son and graduate of Royal Military Academy Sandhurst, purportedly informed British commanders of his intent to overthrow his father.
Revised:  On 23 July 1970, Qaboos bin Said al Said, the Sultan's 29-year-old son and graduate of Sandhurst, purportedly informed British commanders of his intent to overthrow his father.
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Original:  Brigadier John Graham convened the top Arab commanders of the Desert Regiment, the main army unit that would carry out the coup, and informed them of the letter sent to them by Qaboos which "commanded" the British officers to carry out the coup.
Revised:  John Graham convened the top Arab commanders of the Desert Regiment, the main army unit that would carry out the coup, and informed them of the letter sent to them by Qaboos which "commanded" the British officers to carry out the coup.
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Original:  The tribal sheikh of the five hundred guardsmen entrusted to defend the palace's exterior had been convinced by the British to order his men to stand down prior to the coup.
Revised:  The tribal sheikh of the five hundred guardsmen entrusted to defend the palace's exterior had been persuaded by the British to order his men to stand down prior to the coup.
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Original:  The remainder of the coup was carried out predominantly by Arab troops in order to mask the extent of the involvement of foreigners in the operation.
Revised:  The remainder of the coup was carried out predominantly by Arab troops in order to mask the extent of the involvement of the British in the operation.
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Original:  The wounded sultan urged his adviser to send an urgent message to Colonel Hugh Oldman informing him of the events that had transpired but the message was ignored.
Revised:  The wounded sultan urged his adviser to send an urgent message to Oldman informing him of the events that had transpired but the message was ignored.
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Original:  Bin Taimur was flown out of the country on a Royal Air Force Bristol Britannia first to Bahrain for medical treatment and then on to London where he lived the remaining two years of his life in a suite in The Dorchester, a luxury hotel.
Revised:  Bin Taimur was flown out of the country on a RAF Bristol Britannia first to Bahrain for medical treatment and then on to London where he lived the remaining two years of his life in a suite in The Dorchester, a luxury hotel.
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Original:  Aftermath Oil rig in Oman,  1971.
Revised:  Aftermath An oil rig in Oman, 1971.
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Original:  Aftermath Oil rig in Oman,  1971.
Revised:  Aftermath Oil rig in Oman, photographed in 1971.
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Original:  Schools were built, the country was electrified, numerous roads were built, and Western journalists stopped the practice of labeling the country  "medieval".
Revised:  Schools were built, the country was electrified, numerous roads were built, and Western journalists ceased labeling the country "medieval".
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Original:  Schools were built, the country was electrified, numerous roads were built, and Western journalists stopped the practice of labeling the country  "medieval".
Revised:  Schools were built, the country was electrified, numerous roads were built, and Western journalists stopped the practice of labeling the country as "medieval".
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Original:  Slavery was banned , and by 1975 the insurgency in the country had been suppressed in an international effort.
Revised:  Slavery was abolished , and by 1975 the insurgency in the country had been suppressed in an international effort.
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Original:  The success of the Dhofar Rebellion which was proving to be a formidable challenge for Oman and a growing existential threat to the British backed government was reversed with the removal of Taimur.
Revised:  The success of the Dhofar Rebellion which was proving to be a formidable challenge for Oman was reversed with the removal of Taimur.
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Original:  Sultan Qaboos launched a concerted £400 million effort to modernize the Omani military, even founding a navy to protect the country's oil exports.
Revised:  Qaboos launched a concerted £400 million effort to modernize the Omani military, even founding a navy to protect the country's oil exports.
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Original:  This, coupled with mounting international opposition to the rebellion including the deployment of Imperial Iranian troops in 1973 led to a final defeat of the rebels in 1975.
Revised:  This, coupled with mounting international opposition to the rebellion including the deployment of Iranian troops in 1973 led to a final defeat of the rebels in 1975.
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Original:  In fact, the coup had been planned by MI6, the Foreign Office, and the Ministry of Defence and given the go-ahead by British Prime Minister Edward Heath.
Revised:  In fact, the coup had been planned by MI6, the Foreign Office, and the Ministry of Defence and given the go-ahead by prime minister Edward Heath.
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Original:  John Graham convened the top Arab commanders of the Desert Regiment, the main Omani unit that would carry out the coup, and informed them of the letter sent to them by Qaboos which "commanded" the British officers to carry out the coup.
Revised:  Graham convened the top Arab commanders of the Desert Regiment, the main Omani unit that would carry out the coup, and informed them of the letter sent to them by Qaboos which "commanded" the British officers to carry out the coup.
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Original: The 1963 Thanksgiving Day game On Thanksgiving Day, November 28, 1963,  VMI and VPI met for the annual  football game, also known as the “Military Classic of the South”.
Revised: The 1963 Thanksgiving Day game On Thanksgiving Day, November 28, 1963, when VMI and VPI met for the annual football game, also known as the “Military Classic of the South”.
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Original:  They decided to take the cannon to Roanoke the night before the game and hide it in the stadium.
Revised:  They took the cannon to Roanoke the night before the game and hide it in the stadium.
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Original:  They decided to take the cannon to Roanoke the night before the game and hide it in the stadium.
Revised:  They decided to take the cannon to Roanoke the night before the game and hid it in the stadium.
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Original:  During the game, Skipper was shot off after every Virginia Tech score, a tradition that continues today.
Revised:  During the game, Skipper was fired after every Virginia Tech score, a tradition that continues today.
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Original:  During the game, Skipper was shot off after every Virginia Tech score, a tradition that continues today.
Revised:  During the game, Skipper was shot off after every Virginia Tech score, a tradition that remains today.
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Original: History Planning and funding The cadets formulated a strategic plan for the project .
Revised: History Planning and funding The cadets formulated a strategic plan for making the cannon in time for the big game .
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Original:  The biggest concern was funding and the Corps administration declined to be directly involved.
Revised:  The biggest task was fundraising since the school administration declined to be directly involved.
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Original:  Financing would ultimately somehow come from the 1700 cadets themselveswith whatever help they could receive from alumni .
Revised:  Financing would ultimately somehow come from the 1700 cadets would somehow have to come up with the money themselves .
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Original:  At the end of the meetings, every freshly inspired cadet donated one dollar or whatever he could give.
Revised:  At the end of the meetings, every cadet was ask to donate one dollar or whatever he could give.
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Original:  The series of meetings progressively amplified the growing sense of enthusiasm and support , which was just as important as donations .
Revised:  Enthusiasm and support within the Corps grew with each meeting .
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Original:  Brass was the metal chosen for the cannon's barrel , due to its superior characteristics.
Revised:  Due to its superior characteristics, brass was the metal chosen for the cannon's barrel , due to its superior characteristics.
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Original:  At each meeting, cadets were requested to bring whatever brass they could scrounge up, including: brass breastplates, old "rat belt buckles", and hat grommets.
Revised:  At each meeting, cadets were requested to donate whatever brass they could scrounge up, including: brass breastplates, old "rat belt buckles", and hat grommets.
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Original:  At each meeting, cadets were requested to bring whatever brass they could scrounge up, including: brass breastplates, old "rat belt buckles", and hat grommets.
Revised:  At each meeting, cadets were requested to bring whatever brass they could scavenge including: brass breastplates, old "rat belt buckles", and hat grommets.
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Original:  Also, the cadets retrieved spent brass bullet shell casings from the floor of the school's ROTC firing range.
Revised:  The cadets also retrieved spent brass bullet shell casings from the floor of the school's ROTC firing range.
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Original:  Also, the cadets retrieved spent brass bullet shell casings from the floor of the school's ROTC firing range.
Revised:  Also, the cadets retrieved spent brass bullet shell casings from the school's ROTC firing range.
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Original:  Also, the cadets retrieved spent brass bullet shell casings from the floor of the school's ROTC firing range.
Revised:  Also, the cadets retrieved spent brass bullet shell casings from the floor of the school's firing range.
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Original:  The foundry's president, Paul Huffman was sworn to secrecy and when  asked about the cost of forging , he replied "You don't have enough, but I'm a member of the Corps Class of '37 and VPI has needed a cannon for a long time.
Revised:  The foundry's president, Paul Huffman was sworn to secrecy and when asked about the forging price , he replied "You don't have enough, but I'm a member of the Corps Class of '37 and VPI has needed a cannon for a long time.
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Original:  The VMI corps stopped cheering  never chanted again.
Revised:  The VMI corps stopped cheering and never chanted again.
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Original:  It started to become clear that the cannon would in some way need to be named to honor President John Fitzgerald Kennedy.
Revised:  It started to become clear that the cannon would in some way need to be named to honor John F. Kennedy.
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Original:  In his career with the Navy, Kennedy was the captain, or "Skipper"  of a PT boat during World War II.
Revised:  In his career with the Navy, Kennedy was the captain, or "Skipper" , of a PT boat during World War II.
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Original:  So, the first true firing of Skipper was a fifty-round salute to President John Fitzgerald Kennedy.
Revised:  So, the first true firing of Skipper was a fifty-round salute to President Kennedy.
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Original:  The  cannon was created by a group of cadets in 1963 for the rivalry game against the Virginia Military Institute, held annually on Thanksgiving Day in Roanoke, Virginia .
Revised:  The game cannon was created by a group of cadets in 1963 for the rivalry game against the Virginia Military Institute, held annually on Thanksgiving Day in Roanoke, Virginia .
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Original: ?" At that moment, 50 Virginia Tech "Rat" (freshmen) cadets emerged from under the bleachers, pulling the 1,000 pound cannon with two long heavy ropes.
Revised: ?" fifty Virginia Tech cadets emerged from under the bleachers, pulling the 1,000 pound cannon with two long heavy ropes.
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Original: ?" At that moment, 50 Virginia Tech "Rat" (freshmen) cadets emerged from under the bleachers, pulling the 1,000 pound cannon with two long heavy ropes.
Revised: ?" At that moment, 50 Virginia Tech "Rat" (freshmen) cadets emerged from under the bleachers, pulling the 1,000 pound cannon with two heavy ropes.
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Original:  As Skipper entered the stadium, the Highty-Tighties played, "The Parade of the Charioteers", a momentous song from the movie, Ben Hur.
Revised:  As Skipper entered the stadium, the Highty-Tighties played, "The Parade of the Charioteers", a grand song from the movie, Ben Hur.
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Original:  They  positioned Skipper on the field and shot it directly at the opposing sidelines.
Revised:  They strategically positioned Skipper on the field and shot it directly at the opposing sidelines.
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Original:  The VMI corps stopped cheering and never chanted again.
Revised:  The VMI corps became silent and never chanted again.
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Original:  During the game, Skipper was fired after every Virginia Tech score , a tradition that remains today.
Revised:  Skipper was fired after every Virginia Tech score , a tradition that remains today.
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Original:  During the game, Skipper was fired after every Virginia Tech score , a tradition that remains today.
Revised:  During the game, Skipper was fired after every Virginia Tech score ; a tradition that remains today.
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Original:  The Hokies kept Skipper busy, winning the game 35-20.
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Original:   Skipper's legacy Since the VMI game in 1963, Skipper has been fired after every Virginia Tech score at every home football game.
Revised:  Skipper's legacy Since 1963, Skipper has been fired after every Virginia Tech score at every home football game.
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Original:  Other restaurants started to come round to seeing the importance of amusement games and "anchor" attractions (bowling alleys, miniature golf, laser tags, batting cages, roller skating rinks, etc.) to encourage dwell time of 1-2 hours and stimulating repeat visits.
Revised:  Other restaurants started to come round to seeing the importance of amusement games and "anchor" attractions (bowling alleys, miniature golf, laser tags, batting cages, roller skating rinks, etc.) to encourage dwell time of 1–2 hours and stimulating repeat visits.
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Original:  In 2016, BayTek Games (known for their hit game Big Bass Wheel) bought the rights to Skee-Ball from Skee-Ball Amusement Games, Inc.
Revised:  In 2016, BayTek Games bought the rights to Skee-Ball from Skee-Ball Amusement Games, Inc.
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Original:   Other notable players include Apple Industries, Inc. , Coastal Amusements, Universal Space (UNIS), Adrenaline Amusements.
Revised:  Other notable players include Coast to Coast Entertainment, Apple Industries , Coastal Amusements, Universal Space (UNIS), Adrenaline Amusements.
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Original:  (Ottosen p. 417) URL
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Original:  He is the president of Nationalist Democratic Progressive Part 
Revised:  He is the president of Nationalist Democratic Progressive Party. 
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Original: Chingwang Konyak (born 24 April 1943 in Shiyong Village, Mon district  is a former MP from Nagaland.
Revised: Chingwang Konyak (born 24 April 1943 in Shiyong Village, Mon district ) is a former MP from Nagaland.
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Original: Engineer Abul Kalam (25 November 1923 – 9 May 2013) was a Pakistani educator and engineer who was the longest serving Vice-Chancellor of the NED University of Engineering and Technology.
Revised: Engineer Abul Kalam (25 November 1923 – 9 May 2013) was a Pakistani educator and engineer who was the longest serving vice chancellor of the NED University of Engineering and Technology.
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Original:  The degradation of aromatic benzoate to methane produces many intermediate compounds such as formate, acetate, CO2 and H2.
Revised:  The degradation of aromatic benzoate to methane produces many intermediate compounds such as formate, acetate, and H2.
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Original: Strain S: 2 CH3CH2OH + 2 H2O → 2 CH3COO− + 2 H+ + 4 H2 (ΔG°' = +19 kJ) Strain M.o.H.: 4 H2 + CO2 → CH4 + 2 H2O (ΔG°' = -131 kJ) Complex organic compounds such as ethanol, propionate, butyrate, and lactate cannot be directly used as substrates for methanogenesis by methanogens.
Revised: Strain S: 2 CH3CH2OH + 2 H2O → 2 CH3COO− + 2 H+ + 4 H2 (ΔG°' = +19 kJ) Strain M.o.H.: 4 H2 + → CH4 + 2 H2O (ΔG°' = -131 kJ) Complex organic compounds such as ethanol, propionate, butyrate, and lactate cannot be directly used as substrates for methanogenesis by methanogens.
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Original:  Strain S and strain M.o.H of Methanobacillus omelianskii oxidize ethanol into acetate and methane by a process called interspecies hydrogen transfer.
Revised:  Organism S and organism M.o.H of Methanobacillus omelianskii oxidize ethanol into acetate and methane by a process called interspecies hydrogen transfer.
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Original:  Individuals of strain S are observed as obligate anaerobic bacteria that use ethanol as an electron donor, whereas organisms of strain M.o.H  are methanogens that oxidize hydrogen gas to produce methane.
Revised:  Individuals of organism S are observed as obligate anaerobic bacteria that use ethanol as an electron donor, whereas organisms of strain M.o.H are methanogens that oxidize hydrogen gas to produce methane.
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Original:  Individuals of strain S are observed as obligate anaerobic bacteria that use ethanol as an electron donor, whereas organisms of strain M.o.H  are methanogens that oxidize hydrogen gas to produce methane.
Revised:  Individuals of strain S are observed as obligate anaerobic bacteria that use ethanol as an electron donor, whereas M.o.H (Methanobacterium bryantii strain M.o.H are methanogens that oxidize hydrogen gas to produce methane.
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Original:  Individuals of strain S are observed as obligate anaerobic bacteria that use ethanol as an electron donor, whereas organisms of strain M.o.H  are methanogens that oxidize hydrogen gas to produce methane.
Revised:  Individuals of strain S are observed as obligate anaerobic bacteria that use ethanol as an electron donor, whereas organisms of strain M.o.H ) are methanogens that oxidize hydrogen gas to produce methane.
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Original:  These two metabolic reactions can be shown as follows: Strain S: 2 CH3CH2OH + 2 H2O → 2 CH3COO− + 2 H+ + 4 H2 (ΔG°' = +19 kJ) Strain M.o.H.: 4 H2 + → CH4 + 2 H2O (ΔG°' = -131 kJ) Complex organic compounds such as ethanol, propionate, butyrate, and lactate cannot be directly used as substrates for methanogenesis by methanogens.
Revised:  These two metabolic reactions can be shown as follows: Organism S: 2 CH3CH2OH + 2 H2O → 2 CH3COO− + 2 H+ + 4 H2 (ΔG°' = +19 kJ) Strain M.o.H.: 4 H2 + → CH4 + 2 H2O (ΔG°' = -131 kJ) Complex organic compounds such as ethanol, propionate, butyrate, and lactate cannot be directly used as substrates for methanogenesis by methanogens.
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Original: Syntrophy, synthrophy, cross-feeding , or cross feeding Greek syn meaning together, trophe meaning nourishment  is the phenomenon that one species lives off the products of another species.
Revised: Syntrophy, synthrophy, cross-feeding (from Greek syn meaning together, trophe meaning nourishment is the phenomenon that one species lives off the products of another species.
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Original: Syntrophy, synthrophy, cross-feeding , or cross feeding Greek syn meaning together, trophe meaning nourishment  is the phenomenon that one species lives off the products of another species.
Revised: Syntrophy, synthrophy, cross-feeding , or cross feeding Greek syn meaning together, trophe meaning nourishment ) is the phenomenon that one species lives off the products of another species.
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Original: Syntrophy, synthrophy, cross-feeding , or cross feeding Greek syn meaning together, trophe meaning nourishment  is the phenomenon that one species lives off the products of another species.
Revised: Syntrophy, synthrophy, cross-feeding , or cross feeding Greek syn meaning together, trophe meaning nourishment is the phenomenon of one species living off of the products of another species.
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Original:  In this association , the growth of one partner is improved, or depends on the nutrients, growth factors or substrate provided by the other partner.
Revised:  In this form of biological symbiosis , the growth of one partner is improved, or depends on the nutrients, growth factors or substrate provided by the other partner.
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Original:  In this association , the growth of one partner is improved, or depends on the nutrients, growth factors or substrate provided by the other partner.
Revised:  In this association , the growth of one partner depends on the nutrients, growth factors or substrate provided by the other partner.
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Original:  In this association , the growth of one partner is improved, or depends on the nutrients, growth factors or substrate provided by the other partner.
Revised:  In this association , the growth of one partner is improved, or depends on the nutrients, growth factors , or substrates provided by the other partner.
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