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Original:  They thought that the best way to receive divine revelation was through dreaming and thus they would induce (or "incubate") dreams.
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Original:  Egyptians would go to sanctuaries and sleep on special "dream beds" in hope of receiving advice, comfort, or healing from the gods .1991. languages of dreaming : Anthropological approaches to the study of dreaming In other cultures.
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Original:  Egyptians would go to sanctuaries and sleep on special "dream beds" in hope of receiving advice, comfort, or healing from the gods .1991. languages of dreaming : Anthropological approaches to the study of dreaming In other cultures.
Revised:  Egyptians would go to sanctuaries and slept on special "dream beds" in hope of receiving advice, comfort, or healing from the gods .1991. languages of dreaming : Anthropological approaches to the study of dreaming In other cultures.
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Original:  Classical history [[File: Hupao. jpg| Dreaming of the Tiger Spring (虎跑夢泉) ]] In Chinese history, people wrote of two vital aspects of the soul of which one is freed from the body during slumber to journey in a dream realm, while the other remained in the body, although this belief and dream interpretation had been questioned since early times, such as by the philosopher Wang Chong (27–97 AD).
Revised:  [[File: Hupao. jpg| Dreaming of the Tiger Spring (虎跑夢泉) ]] In Chinese history, people wrote of two vital aspects of the soul of which one is freed from the body during slumber to journey in a dream realm, while the other remained in the body, although this belief and dream interpretation had been questioned since early times, such as by the philosopher Wang Chong (27–97 AD).
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Original:  Herodotus in his The Histories, writes " The visions that occur to us in dreams are, more often than not, the things we have been concerned about during the day.
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Original:  He was defeated in battle in 385 and beheaded at the direction of the Eastern Roman emperor . Religious views Abrahamic religions [[File:Michael Lukas Leopold Willmann 001.jpg|  Jacob's dream of a ladder of angels, c. 1690, by Michael Willmann]] In Judaism, dreams are considered part of the experience of the world that can be interpreted and from which lessons can be garnered.
Revised:  He was defeated in battle in 385 and beheaded at the direction of the Eastern Roman emperor . Abrahamic [[File:Michael Lukas Leopold Willmann 001.jpg| Jacob's dream of a ladder of angels, c. 1690, by Michael Willmann]] In Judaism, dreams are considered part of the experience of the world that can be interpreted and from which lessons can be garnered.
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Original:  He was defeated in battle in 385 and beheaded at the direction of the Eastern Roman emperor . Religious views Abrahamic religions [[File:Michael Lukas Leopold Willmann 001.jpg|  Jacob's dream of a ladder of angels, c. 1690, by Michael Willmann]] In Judaism, dreams are considered part of the experience of the world that can be interpreted and from which lessons can be garnered.
Revised:  He was defeated in battle in 385 and beheaded at the direction of the Eastern Roman emperor . Religious views Abrahamic religions [[File:Michael Lukas Leopold Willmann 001.jpg| Jacob's dream of a ladder of angels, c. 1690. Michael Willmann]] In Judaism, dreams are considered part of the experience of the world that can be interpreted and from which lessons can be garnered.
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Original:  For example, the Hebrew prophet Samuel would "lie down and sleep in the temple at Shiloh before the Ark and receive the word of the Lord ".
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Original:  This latter dream could be brought forth by the dreamer's ego or base appetite based on what they experienced in the real world.
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Original:  Hindu In the Mandukya Upanishad, part of the Veda scriptures of Indian Hinduism, a dream is one of three states that the soul experiences during its lifetime, the other two states being the waking state and the sleep state.
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Original:  Philosophical realism [[File: Briullov, Karl - A Dream of a Girl Before a Sunrise .jpg| A Dream of a Girl Before a Sunrise by Karl Bryullov (1830–1833) Some philosophers have concluded that what we think of as the "real world" could be or is an illusion (an idea known as the skeptical hypothesis about ontology) .
Revised:  Philosophical realism [[File: Briullov, Karl - A Dream of a Girl Before a Sunrise .jpg| Some philosophers have concluded that what we think of as the "real world" could be or is an illusion (an idea known as the skeptical hypothesis about ontology) .
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Original:  Philosophical realism [[File: Briullov, Karl - A Dream of a Girl Before a Sunrise .jpg| A Dream of a Girl Before a Sunrise by Karl Bryullov (1830–1833) Some philosophers have concluded that what we think of as the "real world" could be or is an illusion (an idea known as the skeptical hypothesis about ontology) .
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Original:  Art%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Schnorr von Carolsfeld Bibel in Bildern 1860 032.png | Jacob's Dream, Julius Schnorr von Carolsfeld, 1860 ]] The depiction of dreams in Renaissance and Baroque art is often related to Biblical narrative.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Schnorr von Carolsfeld Bibel in Bildern 1860 032.png | Jacob's Dream, Julius Schnorr von Carolsfeld, 1860 ]] The depiction of dreams in Renaissance and Baroque art is often related to Biblical narrative.
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Original:  Literature Dream frames were frequently used in medieval allegory to justify the narrative;
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Cheshire Cat vanishes in Wonderland They have also featured in fantasy and speculative fiction since the 19th century.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Popular culture File:Gospel of Matthew Chapter 2-9 (Bible Illustrations by Sweet Media).jpg|An artist's illustration of Saint Joseph dreaming.
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Original:  Peter Weir's 1977 Australian film The Last Wave makes a simple and straightforward postulate about the premonitory nature of dreams (from one of his Aboriginal characters) that " ... dreams are the shadow of something real "  . In Kyell Gold's novel Green Fairy from the Dangerous Spirits series, the protagonist, Sol, experiences the memories of a dancer who died 100 years before through Absinthe-induced dreams and after each dream, something from it materializes into his reality.
Revised:  Peter Weir's 1977 Australian film The Last Wave makes a simple and straightforward postulate about the premonitory nature of dreams (from one of his Aboriginal characters) that " bad, " . In Kyell Gold's novel Green Fairy from the Dangerous Spirits series, the protagonist, Sol, experiences the memories of a dancer who died 100 years before through Absinthe-induced dreams and after each dream, something from it materializes into his reality.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% REM sleep%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Sleep EEG REM. png|EEG showing brainwaves during REM sleep%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Since waking up usually happens during rapid eye movement sleep (REM), the vivid bizarre REM sleep dreams are the most common type of dreams that is remembered.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Sleep EEG REM. png|EEG showing brainwaves during REM sleep%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Since waking up usually happens during rapid eye movement sleep (REM), the vivid bizarre REM sleep dreams are the most common type of dreams that is remembered.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% REM sleep%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Sleep EEG REM. png|EEG showing brainwaves during REM sleep%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Since waking up usually happens during rapid eye movement sleep (REM), the vivid bizarre REM sleep dreams are the most common type of dreams that is remembered.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Brain activity%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% One of the central questions of sleep research is what part of the brain is driving dreams' video-auditory experience.
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Original:  In the words of Hobson & McCarley, the neocortex is making “the best of a bad job in producing even partially coherent dream imagery from the relatively noisy signals sent up from the brain stem.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% It is also commonly accepted that the intensity of dreams during REM sleep can be dialed up or down by the dopaminergic cells of the ventral tegmental area.
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Original:  Psychology Today, On-line blog, March 25%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Theories on function%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Many hypotheses have been proposed as to what function dreams perform, some of which have been contradicted by later empirical studies.
Revised:  Psychology Today, On-line blog, March 25%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Many hypotheses have been proposed as to what function dreams perform, some of which have been contradicted by later empirical studies.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dynamic psychiatry%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Freud's view In the late 19th century, psychotherapist Sigmund Freud developed a theory (since discredited) that the content of dreams is driven by unconscious wish fulfillment.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Freud's view In the late 19th century, psychotherapist Sigmund Freud developed a theory (since discredited) that the content of dreams is driven by unconscious wish fulfillment.
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Original: Freud, S. New Introductory Lectures on Psychoanalysis (pp. 38 – 70) .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Late in life Freud acknowledged that "It is impossible to classify as wish fulfillments" the repetitive nightmares associated with posttraumatic stress disorder.
Revised: Freud, S. New Introductory Lectures on Psychoanalysis (pp. 38 – %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Late in life Freud acknowledged that "It is impossible to classify as wish fulfillments" the repetitive nightmares associated with posttraumatic stress disorder.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Jung's view%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Carl Jung rejected many of Freud's theories.
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Original:  Fritz Perls' view%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Fritz Perls presented his theory of dreams as part of the holistic nature of Gestalt therapy.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Fritz Perls presented his theory of dreams as part of the holistic nature of Gestalt therapy.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Neurology Activation synthesis hypothesis%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1976 J. Allan Hobson and Robert McCarley proposed a new theory that changed dream research, challenging the previously held Freudian view of dreams as unconscious wishes to be interpreted.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1976 J. Allan Hobson and Robert McCarley proposed a new theory that changed dream research, challenging the previously held Freudian view of dreams as unconscious wishes to be interpreted.
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Original:  Defensive immobilization: the precursor According to Tsoukalas (2012) REM sleep is an evolutionary transformation of a well-known defensive mechanism, the tonic immobility reflex.
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Original:  Strengthening semantic memories [[File: Hippocampus.svg | Location of the hippocampi ]] A 2001 study showed evidence that illogical locations, characters, and dream flow may help the brain strengthen the linking and consolidation of semantic memories.
Revised:  [[File: Hippocampus.svg | Location of the hippocampi ]] A 2001 study showed evidence that illogical locations, characters, and dream flow may help the brain strengthen the linking and consolidation of semantic memories.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% According to Tsoukalas (2012) the biology of dreaming is related to the reactive patterns elicited by predatorial encounters (especially the tonic immobility reflex), a fact that lends support to evolutionary theories claiming that dreams specialize in threat avoidance or emotional processing.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Other%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There are many other hypotheses about the function of dreams, including:Dreams allow the repressed parts of the mind to be satisfied through fantasy while keeping the conscious mind from thoughts that would suddenly cause one to awaken from shock.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There are many other hypotheses about the function of dreams, including:Dreams allow the repressed parts of the mind to be satisfied through fantasy while keeping the conscious mind from thoughts that would suddenly cause one to awaken from shock.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Interpretations%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An artist's painting of a dream .  Dream interpretation can be a result of subjective ideas and experiences.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Interpretations%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An artist's painting of a dream .  Dream interpretation can be a result of subjective ideas and experiences.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Interpretations%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% . Dream interpretation can be a result of subjective ideas and experiences.
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Original:  Vol 96, No 2, 249–264 conducted in the United States, South Korea  and India, they found that 74\% of Indians, 65\% of South Koreans and 56\% of Americans believed their dream content provided them with meaningful insight into their unconscious beliefs and desires.
Revised:  Vol 96, No 2, 249–264 conducted in the United States, South Korea , and India, they found that 74\% of Indians, 65\% of South Koreans and 56\% of Americans believed their dream content provided them with meaningful insight into their unconscious beliefs and desires.
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Original:  Vol 96, No 2, 249–264 conducted in the United States, South Korea  and India, they found that 74\% of Indians, 65\% of South Koreans and 56\% of Americans believed their dream content provided them with meaningful insight into their unconscious beliefs and desires.
Revised:  Vol 96, No 2, 249–264 conducted in the United States, South Korea and India, and found that 74\% of Indians, 65\% of South Koreans and 56\% of Americans believed their dream content provided them with meaningful insight into their unconscious beliefs and desires.
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Original:  This Freudian view of dreaming was believed by the largely non-scientific public significantly more than theories of dreaming that attribute dream content to memory consolidation, problem-solving, or random brain activity. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Importance In the paper, Morewedge and Norton (2009) also found that people attribute more importance to dream content than to similar thought content that occurs while they are awake.
Revised:  This Freudian view of dreaming was believed significantly more than theories of dreaming that attribute dream content to memory consolidation, problem-solving, or random brain activity. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Importance In the paper, Morewedge and Norton (2009) also found that people attribute more importance to dream content than to similar thought content that occurs while they are awake.
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Original:  This Freudian view of dreaming was believed by the largely non-scientific public significantly more than theories of dreaming that attribute dream content to memory consolidation, problem-solving, or random brain activity. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Importance In the paper, Morewedge and Norton (2009) also found that people attribute more importance to dream content than to similar thought content that occurs while they are awake.
Revised:  This Freudian view of dreaming was believed by the largely non-scientific public significantly more than theories of dreaming that attribute dream content to memory consolidation, problem-solving, or as a byproduct of unrelated brain activity. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Importance In the paper, Morewedge and Norton (2009) also found that people attribute more importance to dream content than to similar thought content that occurs while they are awake.
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Original:  This Freudian view of dreaming was believed by the largely non-scientific public significantly more than theories of dreaming that attribute dream content to memory consolidation, problem-solving, or random brain activity. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Importance In the paper, Morewedge and Norton (2009) also found that people attribute more importance to dream content than to similar thought content that occurs while they are awake.
Revised:  This Freudian view of dreaming was believed by the largely non-scientific public significantly more than theories of dreaming that attribute dream content to memory consolidation, problem-solving, or random brain activity. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The same study found that people attribute more importance to dream content than to similar thought content that occurs while they are awake.
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Original:  In one study, Americans were more likely to report that they would miss their flight if they dreamt of their plane crashing than if they thought of their plane crashing the night before flying (while awake), and that they would be as likely to miss their flight if they dreamt of their plane crashing the night before their flight as if there was an actual plane crash on the route they intended to take.
Revised:  Americans were more likely to report that they would miss their flight if they dreamt of their plane crashing than if they thought of their plane crashing the night before flying (while awake), and that they would be as likely to miss their flight if they dreamt of their plane crashing the night before their flight as if there was an actual plane crash on the route they intended to take.
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Original:  People were more likely to view a positive dream about a friend to be meaningful than a positive dream about someone they disliked, for example, and were more likely to view a negative dream about a person they disliked as meaningful than a negative dream about a person they liked.
Revised:  They were more likely to view a positive dream about a friend to be meaningful than a positive dream about someone they disliked, for example, and were more likely to view a negative dream about a person they disliked as meaningful than a negative dream about a person they liked.
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Original:  Therapy Therapy for recurring nightmares (often associated with posttraumatic stress disorder) can include imagining alternative scenarios that could begin at each step of the dream.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Incorporation of reality A depiction of soldiers' dreams.
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Original:  and 4) dreams are collectively interpretable.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Precognition According to surveys, it is common for people to feel their dreams are predicting subsequent life events.
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Original:  Lucidity    [[]]     Lucid dreaming is the conscious perception of one's state while dreaming.
Revised:  Lucidity [[]] Lucid dreams Lucid dreaming is the conscious perception of one's state while dreaming.
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Original:  Oneironaut is a term sometimes used for those who lucidly dream.
Revised:  "Oneironaut" is a term sometimes used for those who lucidly dream.
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Original:  Communication In 1975, psychologist Keith Hearne successfully recorded a communication from a dreamer experiencing a lucid dream.
Revised:  In 1975, psychologist Keith Hearne successfully recorded a communication from a dreamer experiencing a lucid dream.
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Original:  Recall [[ The recollection of dreams is extremely unreliable, though it is a skill that can be trained.
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Original:  Certain brain chemicals necessary for converting short-term memories into long-term ones are suppressed during REM sleep.
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Original:  Unless a dream is particularly vivid and if one wakes during or immediately after it, the content of the dream is  not remembered.
Revised:  Unless a dream is particularly vivid and if one wakes during or immediately after it, the content of the dream is typically not remembered.
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Original:  Using technologies such as functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) and electromyography (EMG), researchers have been able to record basic dream imagery, dream speech activity and dream motor behavior (such as walking and hand movements).
Revised:  Using technologies such as functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) and electromyography (EMG), researchers have been able to identify basic dream imagery, dream speech activity and dream motor behavior (such as walking and hand movements).
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