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Original:  Being then an octogenary , general Sotillo retires from public life after the arrival of general Antonio Guzmán Blanco to power in April, 1870.
Revised:  Being then an octogenary , general Sotillo retired from public life after the arrival of general Antonio Guzmán Blanco to power in April, 1870.
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Original:  General Sotillo dies in his hometown of Santa Ana in 1874 and his remains were put to rest in the Venezuelan National Pantheon on 9 January 1878.
Revised:  General Sotillo died in his hometown of Santa Ana in 1874 and his remains were put to rest in the Venezuelan National Pantheon on 9 January 1878.
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Original:  General Sotillo died in his hometown of Santa Ana in 1874 and his remains were put to rest in the Venezuelan National Pantheon on 9 January 1878.
Revised:  General Sotillo died in his hometown of Santa Ana in 1874 and his remains were put to rest in the National Pantheon of Venezuela on 9 January 1878.
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Original:  Also, two Venezuelan municipalities are named after general Sotillo . Category:1790 births Category: 1878 deaths Category:People from Anzoátegui Sotillo, Juan Antonio Sotillo, Juan Antonio Sotillo, Juan Antonio
Revised:  Juan Antonio Sotillo Municipality is named for him . Category:1790 births Category: 1878 deaths Category:People from Anzoátegui Sotillo, Juan Antonio Sotillo, Juan Antonio Sotillo, Juan Antonio
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Original:  During his long life, a very uncommon circumstance for a military leader at the time, he served under the army of Venezuelan general Simón Bolívar, as well as in most of the Venezuelan 19th century civil wars and military revolts.
Revised:  During his long life, uncommon for a military leader at the time, he served under the army of Venezuelan general Simón Bolívar, as well as in most of the Venezuelan 19th century civil wars and military revolts.
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Original:  During his long life, a very uncommon circumstance for a military leader at the time, he served under the army of Venezuelan general Simón Bolívar, as well as in most of the Venezuelan 19th century civil wars and military revolts.
Revised:  During his long life, a very uncommon circumstance for a military leader at the time, he served under the army of Venezuelan general Simón Bolívar, as well as in most of Venezuela's 19th century civil wars and military revolts.
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Original:  Later, in May , 1853, he was called on to fight an attempt to overthrow the government of José Gregorio Monagas.
Revised:  Later, in May 1853, he was called on to fight an attempt to overthrow the government of José Gregorio Monagas.
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Original:  Later, when arriving in eastern Venezuela, he established a guerrilla operation, from March to May , 1860.
Revised:  Later, when arriving in eastern Venezuela, he established a guerrilla operation, from March to May 1860.
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Original:  Unfortunately, he was defeated on three occasions, the first in El Lecherito in July , 1860;
Revised:  Unfortunately, he was defeated on three occasions, the first in El Lecherito in July 1860;
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Original:  Months thereafter, Sotillo and Monagas fought together in the territory of La Mesa de Guanipa in April , 1861.
Revised:  Months thereafter, Sotillo and Monagas fought together in the territory of La Mesa de Guanipa in April 1861.
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Original:  That same year, in October, he signed a short truce, well-known under the name of the Treaty of Santa Ana, with general José Maria Zamora's forces.
Revised:  That same year, in October, he signed a short truce, well known under the name of the Treaty of Santa Ana, with general José Maria Zamora's forces.
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Original:  In January , 1869, he decided to support the presidential candidacy of José Ruperto Monagas, son of his compadre the late general Jose Tadeo Monagas.
Revised:  In January 1869, he decided to support the presidential candidacy of José Ruperto Monagas, son of his compadre the late general Jose Tadeo Monagas.
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Original:  Being then an octogenarian, general Sotillo retired from public life after the arrival of general Antonio Guzmán Blanco to power in April , 1870.
Revised:  Being then an octogenarian, general Sotillo retired from public life after the arrival of general Antonio Guzmán Blanco to power in April 1870.
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Original:  See also Venezuela Antonio Guzmán Blanco  José Antonio Páez Presidents of Venezuela Federal War
Revised:  See also Antonio Guzmán Blanco José Antonio Páez Presidents of Venezuela Federal War
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Original:  See also Venezuela Antonio Guzmán Blanco  José Antonio Páez Presidents of Venezuela Federal War
Revised:  See also Venezuela Antonio Guzmán Blanco Federal War José Antonio Páez Presidents of Venezuela Federal War
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Original:  See also Venezuela Antonio Guzmán Blanco  José Antonio Páez Presidents of Venezuela Federal War
Revised:  See also Venezuela Antonio Guzmán Blanco José Antonio Páez List of presidents of Venezuela
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Original: Doctoral programs typical accept students with only bachelor's degrees, although some schools may require a master's degree before applying.
Revised: Doctoral programs typically accept students with only bachelor's degrees, although some schools may require a master's degree before applying.
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Original: History [[File:Galton's correlation diagram 1875.jpg|175px|thumbnail|Francis Galton's correlation diagram, 1875. ]] Quantitative psychology has its roots in early experimental psychology when, in the nineteenth century, the scientific method was first systematically applied to psychological phenomena.
Revised: History [[File:Galton's correlation diagram 1875.jpg|175px|thumbnail|Francis Galton's correlation diagram, 1875 ]] Quantitative psychology has its roots in early experimental psychology when, in the nineteenth century, the scientific method was first systematically applied to psychological phenomena.
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Original:  He established the world's first mental testing center in 1882  in the following year he published his observations and theories in "Inquiries into Human Faculty and Its Development".
Revised:  He established the world's first mental testing center in 1882 ; in the following year he published his observations and theories in "Inquiries into Human Faculty and Its Development".
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Original:  Statistical techniques [[File:IQ curve.svg|250px|thumbnail|IQ scores represented by a normal distribution . ]] Statistical methods are the quantitative tools most used by psychologists.
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Original:  Research areas [[File:Social Red.jpg|200px|thumbnail|Example of a social network diagram . ]] Quantitative psychologists generally have a main area of interest.
Revised:  Research areas [[File:Social Red.jpg|200px|thumbnail|Example of a social network diagram ]] Quantitative psychologists generally have a main area of interest.
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Original: Quantitative psychology is a field of scientific study that focuses on the mathematical modeling, research design and methodology, and statistical analysis of human or animal psychological processes.
Revised: Quantitative psychology is a field of scientific study that focuses on the mathematical modeling, research design and methodology, and statistical analysis of psychological processes.
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Original:  It includes tests and other devices for measuring human abilities.
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Original:  Fort Coenraadsburg or Conraadsburg, also Fort São Tiago da Mina, is a fort on the Dutch Gold Coast, built in 1652 to protect Fort Elmina from attacks.
Revised: History Fort Coenraadsburg or Conraadsburg, also Fort São Tiago da Mina, is a fort on the Dutch Gold Coast, built in 1652 to protect Fort Elmina from attacks.
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Original: Hitesh Subhash Ranchoddas Modi (born October 13, 1971 in Kisumu) is a former Kenyan cricketer of Indian Gujarati origin.
Revised: Hitesh Subhash Modi (born October 13, 1971 in Kisumu) is a former Kenyan cricketer of Indian Gujarati origin.
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Original:  Born in Nanjing, Michael Anti became notable when at the Chinese government request Microsoft deleted his blog at the end of 2005.
Revised: Biography Born in Nanjing, Michael Anti became notable when at the Chinese government request Microsoft deleted his blog at the end of 2005.
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Original:  He has been a commentator for the Huaxia Times, correspondent of the 21st Century World Herald, war reporter in Baghdad in 2003, researcher at The Washington Post Beijing Bureau  , columnist for the Southern Metropolis Daily, and publisher of the Far and Wide URL He is a recipient of a Wolfson press fellowship at Cambridge University and Nieman Fellowship at Harvard University .
Revised:  He has been a commentator for the Huaxia Times, correspondent of the 21st Century World Herald, war reporter in Baghdad in 2003, researcher at The Washington Post Beijing Bureau , columnist for the Southern Metropolis Daily, and publisher of the Far and Wide Journal .
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Original:  He delivered a seminar at the Journalism and Media Studies Centre, The University of Hong Kong, on 12 April 2007, in which he talked about the ways to survive as a journalist in China by introducing two concepts of news reporting: propaganda and professionalism.
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Original:  Most recently, he worked as project director in " Cheung Kong School of Journalism and Communication " of Shantou University from September 2008 to March 2009, but his journalistic education work could be traced to 2002, when he wrote a web post ""Manual for New Journalists""(Chinese)  .
Revised:  worked as project director in " Cheung Kong School of Journalism and Communication " of Shantou University from September 2008 to March 2009, but his journalistic education work could be traced to 2002, when he wrote a web post ""Manual for New Journalists""(Chinese) .
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Original:  Most recently, he worked as project director in " Cheung Kong School of Journalism and Communication " of Shantou University from September 2008 to March 2009, but his journalistic education work could be traced to 2002, when he wrote a web post ""Manual for New Journalists""(Chinese)  .
Revised:  Most recently, he worked as project director in Cheung Kong School of Journalism and Communication " of Shantou University from September 2008 to March 2009, but his journalistic education work could be traced to 2002, when he wrote a web post ""Manual for New Journalists""(Chinese) .
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Original:  Most recently, he worked as project director in " Cheung Kong School of Journalism and Communication " of Shantou University from September 2008 to March 2009, but his journalistic education work could be traced to 2002, when he wrote a web post ""Manual for New Journalists""(Chinese)  .
Revised:  Most recently, he worked as project director in " Cheung Kong School of Journalism and Communication of Shantou University from September 2008 to March 2009, but his journalistic education work could be traced to 2002, when he wrote a web post ""Manual for New Journalists""(Chinese) .
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Original:  Most recently, he worked as project director in " Cheung Kong School of Journalism and Communication " of Shantou University from September 2008 to March 2009, but his journalistic education work could be traced to 2002, when he wrote a web post ""Manual for New Journalists""(Chinese)  .
Revised:  Most recently, he worked as project director in " Cheung Kong School of Journalism and Communication " of Shantou University from September 2008 to March 2009. .
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Original:  Award He is a recipient of a Wolfson press fellowship at Cambridge University and Nieman Fellowship at Harvard University.
Revised:  Awards He is a recipient of a Wolfson press fellowship at Cambridge University and Nieman Fellowship at Harvard University.
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Original: Jing Zhao (, born 1975), better known by his pen name Michael Anti, is a Chinese journalist and political blogger,  known for his posts about freedom of the press in China.
Revised: Jing Zhao (, born 1975), better known by his pen name Michael Anti, is a Chinese journalist and political blogger, also known for his posts about freedom of the press in China.
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Original: Fort Batenstein was not an important fort until 1838 , when the Dutch–Ahanta War made it the focal point of Dutch military effort on the Coast.
Revised: Fort Batenstein was not an important fort until 1837 , when the Dutch–Ahanta War made it the focal point of Dutch military effort on the Coast.
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Original: Fort Batenstein was the second trading post established by the Dutch on their Gold Coast between 1595 and 1600, after Fort Nassau was founded in Mouri around the same time.
Revised: Fort Batenstein was a fort and trading post established by the Dutch on their Gold Coast between 1595 and 1600, after Fort Nassau was founded in Mouri around the same time.
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Original:  In 1649, the trading post was upgraded into a fort.
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Original:  The formulation of the treaty stands in stark contrast to the earlier Treaty of Axim, which governed the relationship between the Dutch and the peoples around Fort Saint Anthony, and which phrased the relationship in terms of mutual obligations and jurisdictions   .
Revised:  The formulation of the treaty stands in stark contrast to the earlier Treaty of Axim, which governed the relationship between the Dutch and the peoples around Fort Saint Anthony, and which phrased the relationship in terms of mutual obligations and jurisdictions . .
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Original: Fort Batenstein was a fort and trading post established by the Dutch on the Gold Coast in 1656.
Revised: Fohej rt Batenstein was a fort and trading post established by the Dutch on the Gold Coast in 1656.
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Original: This glossary of ecology is a list of definitions of terms and topics in ecology and related fields.
Revised: This glossary of ecology is a list of definitions of terms and concepts in ecology and related fields.
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Original:  Biology Botany Zoology History of ecology
Revised:  Index of ecology articles Outline of ecology History of ecology
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Original: Fort Orange (Dutch: Fort Oranje) was built as a trading post on the Dutch Gold Coast in 1642, Axim near Sekondi in the Western Region of Ghana.
Revised: Fort Orange (Dutch: Fort Oranje) was built as a trading post on the Dutch Gold Coast in 1642, near Sekondi in the Western Region of Ghana.
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Original:  In 1872, the fort was ceded to the United Kingdom, together with the entire Dutch Gold Coast.      
Revised:  In 1872, the fort was ceded to the United Kingdom, together with the entire Dutch Gold Coast. Notes
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Original: The rivalry evidenced by the forts built within each other's reach was as much a local one in the Eguafo state as it was one between the European powers.
Revised: The rivalry evidenced by the forts built within each other's reach was as much a rivalry within the Eguafo state as it was one between the European powers.
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Original:  In fact, at the time of the Komenda Wars, Great Britain and the Dutch Republic were in a personal union, both led by William III of Orange.
Revised:  In fact, at the time of the Komenda Wars, Great Britain and the Dutch Republic were in a personal union, with both states being led by William III of Orange.
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Original: Fort Vredenburgh was a  fort on the Dutch Gold Coast established in 1682 on the left bank on the Komenda River.
Revised: Fort Vredenburgh was a Dutch fort on the Dutch Gold Coast established in 1682 on the left bank on the Komenda River.
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Original: Fort Vredenburgh was a  fort on the Dutch Gold Coast established in 1682 on the left bank on the Komenda River.
Revised: Fort Vredenburgh was a fort on the Gold Coast, established in 1682 on the left bank on the Komenda River.
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Original: Since halfway  the 17th century, the state of Komenda (a part of the Kingdom of Eguafo), was a site of fierce competition between the English, Dutch, Danish, Brandenburgish and French traders.
Revised: Since halfway through the 17th century, the state of Komenda (a part of the Kingdom of Eguafo), was a site of fierce competition between the English, Dutch, Danish, Brandenburgish and French traders.
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Original:  Still, they could not prevent the Jean-Baptiste du Casse from establishing a French trade post at Komenda in 1687.
Revised:  Still, they could not prevent Jean-Baptiste du Casse from establishing a French trade post at Komenda in 1687.
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Original: A photograph taken on the International Space Station (ISS) in 2021 showed golden areas near the Amazon River.
Revised: A photograph taken from the International Space Station (ISS) in 2021 showed golden areas near the Amazon River.
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Original:  Such photography and, especially, satellite surveys, have revealed the extent of the impact of such operations.
Revised:  Such photography and, especially, satellite surveys, have revealed the extent of the impact of these operations.
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Original:  A bit later, in 1618, Sir Walter Raleigh, the great inspirer, was beheaded for insubordination and treason .
Revised:  In 1618, Sir Walter Raleigh, the great inspirer, was beheaded for insubordination and treason .
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Several literary works have used the name in their titles, sometimes as "El Dorado", and other times as "Eldorado".
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Original:  Muisca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Muisca occupied the highlands of Cundinamarca and Boyacá departments of Colombia in two migrations from outlying lowland areas, one starting c. 1270 BCE, and a second between 800 BCE and 500 BCE.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Muisca occupied the highlands of Cundinamarca and Boyacá departments of Colombia in two migrations from outlying lowland areas, one starting c. 1270 BCE, and a second between 800 BCE and 500 BCE.
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Original:  2007. Grandes culturas indígenas de América Great indigenous cultures of the Americas%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , Plaza Janes Editores Colombia S.A..
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Original:  2007. Grandes culturas indígenas de América Great indigenous cultures of the Americas%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , Plaza Janes Editores Colombia S.A..
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Original:  2007. Grandes culturas indígenas de América Great indigenous cultures of the Americas%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , Plaza Janes Editores Colombia S.A..
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1638, Freyle wrote this account of the ceremony, addressed to the cacique or governor of Guatavita:
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Original:  There is also an account, titled The Quest of El Dorado, by poet-priest and historian of the Conquest Juan de Castellanos, who had served under Jiménez de Quesada in his campaign against the Muisca, written in the mid-16th century but not published until 1850:
Revised:  There is also an account, titled The Quest of El Dorado, and the name By countless ways was spread throughout the world.
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Original:  In his Historia general y natural de las Indias (1535, expanded in 1851 from his previously unpublished papers), Gonzalo Fernández de Oviedo y Valdés noted: In the Muisca territories, there were a number of natural locations considered sacred, including lakes, rivers, forests and large rocks.
Revised:  In the Muisca territories, there were a number of natural locations considered sacred, including lakes, rivers, forests and large rocks.
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Original:  [[File:Musterung-Welser-Armada.png| 200px| Inspection of the Welser army by Georg von Speyer (right) and Philipp von Hutten (center) at Sanlúcar de Barrameda.
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Original:   Trinidad and Tobago stamp featuring the 'Discovery of Lake Asphalt by Raleigh, 1595' Walter Raleigh File:Guaiana ofte de Provincien tusschen Rio de las Amazonas ende Rio de Yuiapari ofte Orinoque.jpg|Lake Parime (Parime Lacus) on a map by Hessel Gerritsz (1625).
Revised:  Walter Raleigh Trinidad and Tobago stamp featuring the 'Discovery of Lake Asphalt by Raleigh, 1595' Walter Raleigh File:Guaiana ofte de Provincien tusschen Rio de las Amazonas ende Rio de Yuiapari ofte Orinoque.jpg|Lake Parime (Parime Lacus) on a map by Hessel Gerritsz (1625).
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Original:  Walter Raleigh 's 1595 journey with Antonio de Berrio had aimed to reach Lake Parime in the highlands of Guyana (the supposed location of El Dorado at the time).
Revised:  's 1595 journey with Antonio de Berrio had aimed to reach Lake Parime in the highlands of Guyana (the supposed location of El Dorado at the time).
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Original:  Brisk then put into Pomoni in possession of Manuela to make arrangements to replace the slaver crew with a prize crew.
Revised:  Brisk then put into Pomoni in possession of Emanuela to make arrangements to replace the slaver crew with a prize crew.
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Original:  According to Dickens, she sailed so fast that the crew did not realize they were already eleven miles offshore and standing into danger   .
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Original:  Contrary to the popular belief that work equates to efforts aside from parents' duties as a childcare provider and home maker , it is thought that housewives or househusbands count as working parents.
Revised:  Contrary to the popular belief that work equates to efforts aside from parents' duties as a childcare provider and homemaker , it is thought that housewives or househusbands count as working parents.
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Original: Mommy wars The battle between working mothers and stay-at-home moms has been named "mommy wars" . Arguments between these two types of mothers center around the most effective use of one's time when raising children.
Revised: Mommy wars The phrase "mommy wars" . Arguments between these two types of mothers center around the most effective use of one's time when raising children.
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Original:  For instance, in the Netherlands, the marriage bar was removed in 1957,The Economics of Imperfect Labor Markets: Second Edition, by Tito Boeri, Jan van Ours, pp. 105Dutch gender and LGBT-equality policy, 2013–162015 Review BPFA Report of the Netherlands Government and in Ireland it was removed in 1973.
Revised:  For instance, in the Netherlands, the marriage bar was removed in 1957,The Economics of Imperfect Labor Markets: Second Edition, by Tito Boeri, Jan van Ours, pp. 105 and in Ireland it was removed in 1973.
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