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Original:  In the early 2000's he could sometimes be found in the restaurant besides his home and he' s give young hockey players  change to buy candy and recount some stories.
Revised:  In the early 2000's he could sometimes be found in the restaurant besides his home and he' s give young hockey players some change to buy candy and recount some stories.
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Original:  In the early 2000's he could sometimes be found in the restaurant besides his home and he' s give young hockey players  change to buy candy and recount some stories.
Revised:  In the early 2000's he could sometimes be found in the restaurant besides his home and he' s give young hockey players change to buy candy and tell them some stories.
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Original: Career Dubbed as the Fighting Fisherman, he began his professional career in 1948, boxing at various venues around the province of New Brunswick.
Revised: Career Dubbed as The Fighting Fisherman, he began his professional career in 1948, boxing at various venues around the province of New Brunswick.
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Original: Career Dubbed as The Fighting Fisherman, he began his professional career in 1948, boxing at various venues around the province of New Brunswick.
Revised: Career Billed as The Fighting Fisherman, he began his professional career in 1948, boxing at various venues around the province of New Brunswick.
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Original: Member Trade Unions In 1982, trade union members of the scheme included Transport and General Workers Union, IPMS (now Prospect) , Amalgamated Engineering and Electrical Union(now Amicus) , GMB and PCS.
Revised: Member Trade Unions In 1982, trade union members of the scheme included Transport and General Workers Union, IPMS (now Prospect) , Amalgamated Engineering Union , GMB and PCS.
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Original:  Other trades ' unions joined as the scheme expanded.
Revised:  Other trades unions joined as the scheme expanded.
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Original:  Later members include the EETPU and MSF (both now Amicus) , UCATT, EMA (now Prospect) , Unison, the First Division Association of Civil Servants, the AEA Constabulary Federation (now the Civil Nuclear Police Federation) and the Defence Police Federation.
Revised:  Later members include the EETPU and MSF , UCATT, EMA (now Prospect) , Unison, the First Division Association of Civil Servants, the AEA Constabulary Federation (now the Civil Nuclear Police Federation) and the Defence Police Federation.
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Original:  As of December 2015, 1525 cases have been considered since the compensation scheme for radiation-linked diseases was established.
Revised:  As of December 2015, 1525 cases had been considered since the compensation scheme for radiation-linked diseases was established.
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Original:  156 of these claims have been successful, and payments totaling £8.24 million have been dispatched.
Revised:  156 of these claims were successful, and payments totaling £8.24 million have been dispatched.
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Original:  156 of these claims have been successful, and payments totaling £8.24 million have been dispatched.
Revised:  156 of these claims have been successful, and payments totaling £8.24 million had been dispatched.
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Original: Slavery in Turkey is illegal, through like many other countries, it suffers from issues related to human trafficking.
Revised: Slavery in Turkey is illegal, though like many other countries, it suffers from issues related to human trafficking.
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Original: Slavery in Turkey is illegal, through like many other countries, it suffers from issues related to human trafficking.
Revised: Slavery in Turkey is illegal, through like many other countries, it suffers from issues relating to human trafficking.
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Original: From September 1848 he participates in the fights against Josip Jelačić.
Revised: From September 1848 he participated in the fights against Josip Jelačić.
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Original:  From 8 (16) October he is major, division commander in the regiments which joined the Hungarian side.
Revised:  From 8 (16) October he was major, division commander in the regiments which joined the Hungarian side.
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Original:  From 26 November 1848 he is the commander of the IX.
Revised:  From 26 November 1848 he was the commander of the IX.
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Original:  From 5 January 1849 he is brigadier, from 18 February commander of a division in the Army of the Northern Danube led by Artúr Görgei.
Revised:  From 5 January 1849 he was brigadier, from 18 February commander of a division in the Army of the Northern Danube led by Artúr Görgei.
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Original:  For his victory in the Battle of Hatvan, he receives the title of general and the III.
Revised:  For his victory in the Battle of Hatvan, he received the title of general and the III.
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Original:  His decision to not to attack with his army corps the Austrians in the Battle of Isaszeg, is considered a big mistake, which could been bring the destruction of the united Hapsburg forces in Hungary under the lead of Marshall Alfred I, Prince of Windisch-Grätz..
Revised:  His decision to not to attack with his army corps the Austrians in the Battle of Isaszeg, was considered a big mistake, which could been bring the destruction of the united Hapsburg forces in Hungary under the lead of Marshall Alfred I, Prince of Windisch-Grätz..
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Original:  His decision to not to attack with his army corps the Austrians in the Battle of Isaszeg, is considered a big mistake, which could been bring the destruction of the united Hapsburg forces in Hungary under the lead of Marshall Alfred I, Prince of Windisch-Grätz..
Revised:  His decision to not to attack with his army corps the Austrians in the Battle of Isaszeg, is considered a big mistake, which could been bring the destruction of the united Habsburg forces in Hungary under the lead of Marshall Alfred I, Prince of Windisch-Grätz..
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Original:  After Hungary's Surrender at Világos in front of the Russian troops, and the end of the Hungarian War of Independence, he was sentenced to 10 years in prison by the Austrian authorities, but in 1850 he is pardoned.
Revised:  After Hungary's Surrender at Világos in front of the Russian troops, and the end of the Hungarian War of Independence, he was sentenced to 10 years in prison by the Austrian authorities, but in 1850 he was pardoned.
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Original:  He becomes postmaster in Bihar.
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Original:  Between 1868-1875 is parlamentarian in the Hungarian Parliament, than is elected as president of the Central Honvéd Association..
Revised:  Between 1868-1875 he was a parlamentarian in the Hungarian Parliament, than is elected as president of the Central Honvéd Association..
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Original:  Between 1868-1875 is parlamentarian in the Hungarian Parliament, than is elected as president of the Central Honvéd Association..
Revised:  Between 1868-1875 is parlamentarian in the House of Representatives, than was elected as president of the Central Honvéd Association..
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Original: 220px| Vladimir Kirsanov Bo Åke Skoglund, best known as Bosse Skoglund, (10 April 1936 - 10 April 2021) was a Swedish musician, drummer and percussionist.
Revised: 220px| Bosse Skoglund Bo Åke Skoglund, best known as Bosse Skoglund, (10 April 1936 - 10 April 2021) was a Swedish musician, drummer and percussionist.
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Original:  Skoglund appeared as a musicians in the songs Varm korv boogie, Tunna skivor and Klas-Göran.
Revised:  Skoglund appeared as a musician in the songs Varm korv boogie, Tunna skivor and Klas-Göran.
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Original: 220px| Bosse Skoglund Bo Åke Skoglund, best known as Bosse Skoglund, (10 April 1936 – 10 April 2021) was a Swedish musician, drummer and percussionist.
Revised:  Bo Åke Skoglund, best known as Bosse Skoglund, (10 April 1936 – 10 April 2021) was a Swedish musician, drummer and percussionist.
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Original: Active Design is a set of building and planning principles that promote physical activity.
Revised: Active design is a set of building and planning principles that promote physical activity.
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Original:  History Active Design - England Sport England considers that the built environment has a vital role to play to encourage people to be physically active as part of their daily lives, enabling communities to lead more active and healthy lifestyles.
Revised:  History In England Sport England considers that the built environment has a vital role to play to encourage people to be physically active as part of their daily lives, enabling communities to lead more active and healthy lifestyles.
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Original:  In 2007 Sport England and David Lock Associates produced Active Design, which provided a set of design guidelines to help promote opportunities for sport and physical activity in the design and layout of new development.
Revised:  In 2007 Sport England and David Lock Associates published Active URL which provided a set of design guidelines to help promote opportunities for sport and physical activity in the design and layout of new development.
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Original:  The guidance was developed in two phases , phase one (2005) developed the three key Active Design objects of - improving Accessibility, enhancing Amenity and increasing Awareness (The 3 A's).
Revised:  The guidance was developed in two phases . Phase one (2005) developed the three key Active Design objects of - improving Accessibility, enhancing Amenity and increasing Awareness (The 3 A's).
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Original:  The guidance was developed in two phases , phase one (2005) developed the three key Active Design objects of - improving Accessibility, enhancing Amenity and increasing Awareness (The 3 A's).
Revised:  The guidance was developed in two phases , phase one (2005) developed the three key active design objects of improving accessibility, enhancing amenity and increasing awareness ("the 3 A's).
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Original:  The guidance was developed in two phases , phase one (2005) developed the three key Active Design objects of - improving Accessibility, enhancing Amenity and increasing Awareness (The 3 A's).
Revised:  The guidance was developed in two phases , phase one (2005) developed the three key Active Design objects of - improving Accessibility, enhancing Amenity and increasing Awareness (The 3 URL
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Original:  Phase two included two stakeholder sessions (May  October 2006) which expanded ‘The 3 A ’s’ into a criterion based approach.
Revised:  Phase two included two stakeholder sessions (May and October 2006) which expanded ‘The 3 A ’s’ into a criterion based approach.
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Original:  Phase two included two stakeholder sessions (May  October 2006) which expanded ‘The 3 A ’s’ into a criterion based approach.
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Original:  Phase two included two stakeholder sessions (May  October 2006) which expanded ‘The 3 A ’s’ into a criterion based approach.
Revised:  Phase two included two stakeholder sessions (May October 2006) which expanded ‘The 3 A 's" into a criterion-based URL
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Original:  In 2014, Sport England held a stakeholder session made up of a range of bodies and individuals including Urban Planning and Public Health professionals to discuss whether Active Design was still relevant in today's planning and health context .
Revised:  In 2014, Sport England held a stakeholder session made up of a range of bodies and individuals including urban planning and public health professionals to discuss whether Active Design was still relevant in today's planning and health context .
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Original:  In 2014, Sport England held a stakeholder session made up of a range of bodies and individuals including Urban Planning and Public Health professionals to discuss whether Active Design was still relevant in today's planning and health context .
Revised:  In 2014, Sport England held a stakeholder session made up of a range of bodies and individuals including Urban Planning and Public Health professionals to discuss whether active design was still relevant in today's planning and health context .
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Original:  In 2014, Sport England held a stakeholder session made up of a range of bodies and individuals including Urban Planning and Public Health professionals to discuss whether Active Design was still relevant in today's planning and health context .
Revised:  In 2014, Sport England held a stakeholder session made up of a range of bodies and individuals including Urban Planning and Public Health professionals to discuss whether Active Design was still relevant in the current planning and health context .
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Original:  The guide was revised, retaining ‘The 3 A ’s’ and refining the criteria based approach to the Ten Principles of Active Design .
Revised:  The guide was revised, retaining "the 3 A ’s’ and refining the criteria based approach to the Ten Principles of Active Design .
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Original:  The guide was revised, retaining ‘The 3 A ’s’ and refining the criteria based approach to the Ten Principles of Active Design .
Revised:  The guide was revised, retaining ‘The 3 A 's" and refining the criteria based approach to the Ten Principles of Active Design .
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Original:  The guide was revised, retaining ‘The 3 A ’s’ and refining the criteria based approach to the Ten Principles of Active Design .
Revised:  The guide was revised, retaining ‘The 3 A ’s’ and refining the criteria-based approach to the Ten Principles of Active Design .
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Original:  The guide was revised, retaining ‘The 3 A ’s’ and refining the criteria based approach to the Ten Principles of Active Design .
Revised:  The guide was revised, retaining ‘The 3 A ’s’ and refining the criteria based approach to the ten principles of active design .
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Original:  The revised Active Design (prepared by Sport England and David Lock Associates) was published in 2015, and was supported by Public Health England.
Revised:  The revised Active Design was published in 2015, and was supported by Public Health England.
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Original:  The revised Active Design (prepared by Sport England and David Lock Associates) was published in 2015, and was supported by Public Health England.
Revised:  The revised Active Design (prepared by Sport England and David Lock Associates) was published in 2015, and was supported by Public Health URL
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Original:  In 2016 Active Design: Planning for health and wellbeing through sport and physical activity was shortlisted for an award at the Royal Town Planning Institute (RTPI) Awards for Planning Excellence.
Revised:  In 2016 Active Design: Planning for Health and Wellbeing through Sport and Physical Activity was shortlisted for an award at the Royal Town Planning Institute (RTPI) Awards for Planning Excellence.
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Original:  Active Design was shortlisted in the category of  Excellence in Planning for Community and Wellbeing  .
Revised:  Active Design was shortlisted in the category of " Excellence in Planning for Community and Wellbeing .
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Original:  Active Design was shortlisted in the category of  Excellence in Planning for Community and Wellbeing  .
Revised:  Active Design was shortlisted in the category of Excellence in Planning for Community and Wellbeing " .
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Original: Royal Town Planning Institute - Excellence In Planning Awards 2016 short list URL In 2017 Sport England prepared two animated films, Active Design by Sport England and The Ten Principles of Active Design, in addition to three further Case Studies.
Revised: Royal Town Planning Institute - Excellence In Planning Awards 2016 short list URL In 2017 Sport England prepared two animated films, Active Design by Sport URL and The Ten Principles of Active Design, in addition to three further Case Studies.
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Original: Royal Town Planning Institute - Excellence In Planning Awards 2016 short list URL In 2017 Sport England prepared two animated films, Active Design by Sport England and The Ten Principles of Active Design, in addition to three further Case Studies.
Revised: Royal Town Planning Institute - Excellence In Planning Awards 2016 short list URL In 2017 Sport England prepared two animated films, Active Design by Sport England and The Ten Principles of Active URL in addition to three further Case Studies.
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Original:  The Active Design principles are becoming increasingly embedded into Built Environment practice and placemaking design, with a growing list of Local Authorities in England making reference to Sport England's Active Design guidance in planning policy.
Revised:  The active design principles are becoming increasingly embedded into Built Environment practice and placemaking design, with a growing list of Local Authorities in England making reference to Sport England's Active Design guidance in planning policy.
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Original:  The Active Design principles are becoming increasingly embedded into Built Environment practice and placemaking design, with a growing list of Local Authorities in England making reference to Sport England's Active Design guidance in planning policy.
Revised:  The Active Design principles are becoming increasingly embedded into built environment practice and placemaking design, with a growing list of Local Authorities in England making reference to Sport England's Active Design guidance in planning policy.
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Original:  The Active Design principles are becoming increasingly embedded into Built Environment practice and placemaking design, with a growing list of Local Authorities in England making reference to Sport England's Active Design guidance in planning policy.
Revised:  The Active Design principles are becoming increasingly embedded into Built Environment practice and placemaking design, with a growing list of local authorities in England making reference to Sport England's Active Design guidance in planning policy.
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Original:  The Active Design principles are becoming increasingly embedded into Built Environment practice and placemaking design, with a growing list of Local Authorities in England making reference to Sport England's Active Design guidance in planning policy.
Revised:  The Active Design principles are becoming increasingly embedded into Built Environment practice and placemaking design, with a growing list of Local Authorities in England making reference to Sport England's active design guidance in planning policy.
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Original:  In 2018 Active Design was embedded into the principles of the revised  Essex Design Guide  (prepared by Essex County Council and supported by Sport England).
Revised:  In 2018 active design was embedded into the principles of the revised Essex Design Guide (prepared by Essex County Council and supported by Sport England).
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Original:  In 2018 Active Design was embedded into the principles of the revised  Essex Design Guide  (prepared by Essex County Council and supported by Sport England).
Revised:  In 2018 Active Design was embedded into the principles of the revised " Essex Design Guide (prepared by Essex County Council and supported by Sport England).
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Original:  In 2018 Active Design was embedded into the principles of the revised  Essex Design Guide  (prepared by Essex County Council and supported by Sport England).
Revised:  In 2018 Active Design was embedded into the principles of the revised Essex Design Guide " (prepared by Essex County Council and supported by Sport England).
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Original:  In 2018 Active Design was embedded into the principles of the revised  Essex Design Guide  (prepared by Essex County Council and supported by Sport England).
Revised:  In 2018 Active Design was embedded into the principles of the revised Essex Design Guide (prepared by Essex County Council and supported by Sport URL
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Original:  Active Design - New York Effects There are few studies of the effects of implementing active design concepts, but they are in general agreement that the physical activity of occupants is increased.
Revised:  In New York Effects There are few studies of the effects of implementing active design concepts, but they are in general agreement that the physical activity of occupants is increased.
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Original:  Moving to an active design building seemed to have physical health benefits for workers, but workers ’ perceptions on productivity about the new work environment have varied.
Revised:  Moving to an active design building seemed to have physical health benefits for workers, but workers ' perceptions on productivity about the new work environment have varied.
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Original:  A study reported that staff moved into an active design building decreased the time spent sitting by 1.2 h/ day.
Revised:  A study reported that staff moved into an active design building decreased the time spent sitting by 1.2 hours per day.
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Original:  In 2007 Sport England and David Lock Associates published Active URL which provided a set of design guidelines to help promote opportunities for sport and physical activity in the design and layout of new development.
Revised:  In 2007 Sport England and David Lock Associates published Active Design, which provided a set of design guidelines to help promote opportunities for sport and physical activity in the design and layout of new development.
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Original:  Phase one (2005) developed the three key active design objects of improving accessibility, enhancing amenity and increasing awareness ("the 3 URL Phase two included two stakeholder sessions (May and October 2006) which expanded "the 3 A's" into a criterion-based URL These criteria formed the guidance which was published in 2007.
Revised:  Phase one (2005) developed the three key active design objects of improving accessibility, enhancing amenity and increasing awareness ("the 3 A's"). Phase two included two stakeholder sessions (May and October 2006) which expanded "the 3 A's" into a criterion-based URL These criteria formed the guidance which was published in 2007.
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Original:  Phase one (2005) developed the three key active design objects of improving accessibility, enhancing amenity and increasing awareness ("the 3 URL Phase two included two stakeholder sessions (May and October 2006) which expanded "the 3 A's" into a criterion-based URL These criteria formed the guidance which was published in 2007.
Revised:  Phase one (2005) developed the three key active design objects of improving accessibility, enhancing amenity and increasing awareness ("the 3 URL Phase two included two stakeholder sessions (May and October 2006) which expanded "the 3 A's" into a criterion-based approach. These criteria formed the guidance which was published in 2007.
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Original:  The revised Active Design was published in 2015, and was supported by Public Health URL In 2016 Active Design: Planning for Health and Wellbeing through Sport and Physical Activity was shortlisted for an award at the Royal Town Planning Institute (RTPI) Awards for Planning Excellence.
Revised:  The revised Active Design was published in 2015, and was supported by Public Health England. In 2016 Active Design: Planning for Health and Wellbeing through Sport and Physical Activity was shortlisted for an award at the Royal Town Planning Institute (RTPI) Awards for Planning Excellence.
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