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Original:  For example, many of the publishers of scientific journals are in Europe and do not set prices in  United States dollars, so the prices of such scholarly journals in the United States vary in relation to exchange rate fluctuations .
Revised:  For example, journal publishers in United States dollars, so the prices of such scholarly journals in the United States vary in relation to exchange rate fluctuations .
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Original:  For example, many of the publishers of scientific journals are in Europe and do not set prices in  United States dollars, so the prices of such scholarly journals in the United States vary in relation to exchange rate fluctuations .
Revised:  For example, many of the publishers of scientific journals are in Europe and do not set prices in United States dollars, so subscribers in the United States will experience varying prices due to exchange rate fluctuations. The converse is true for European institutions who subscribe to journals published in the United States vary in relation to exchange rate fluctuations .
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Original:  For example, many of the publishers of scientific journals are in Europe and do not set prices in  United States dollars, so the prices of such scholarly journals in the United States vary in relation to exchange rate fluctuations .
Revised:  For example, many of the publishers of scientific journals are in Europe and do not set prices in United States dollars, so the prices of such scholarly journals in the United States . As the United States and Europe publish the vast majority of scholarly journals, libraries in other regions are subject to ever greater uncertainty. Although exchange rates can go down as well as up, long-term trends in currency values can lead to chronic price inflation experienced by particular libraries or collections .
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Original: Mayors of Mumbai Category:Rajya Sabha members from Maharashtra Category:1st Lok Sabha members Category:2nd Lok Sabha members Category:4th Lok Sabha members Category:People from Bhavnagar Category:People from Bhandara Category:Praja Socialist Party politicians Category:Indians imprisoned during the Emergency (India) Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:Gujarati people Category:English-language writers from India Category:Indian National Congress (Organisation) politicia
Revised: Mayors of Mumbai Category:Rajya Sabha members from Maharashtra Category:1st Lok Sabha members Category:2nd Lok Sabha members Category:4th Lok Sabha members Category:People from Bhavnagar Category:People from Bhandara Category:Praja Socialist Party politicians Category:Indians imprisoned during the Emergency (India) Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:Gujarati people Category:English-language writers from India Category:Indian National Congress (Organisation) politicians Category:Lok Sabha members from Maharasht
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Original:  He helped organize the socialist wing Congress Socialist Party of the Indian National Congress, along with Rambriksh Benipuri  Jaya Prakash Narayan, and was heavily involved in the politics and government of the city of Bombay.
Revised:  He helped organize the socialist wing Congress Socialist Party of the Indian National Congress, along with Rambriksh Benipuri , Jaya Prakash Narayan, and was heavily involved in the politics and government of the city of Bombay.
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Original: Ashok Mehta (24 October 1911 in Bhavnagar –  1984  ) was an Indian freedom fighter and socialist politician.
Revised: Ashok Mehta (24 October 1911 , Bhavnagar – 1984 ) was an Indian freedom fighter and socialist politician.
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Original: Ashok Mehta (24 October 1911, Bhavnagar – 10 December 1984, New Delhi) was an Indian freedom fighter and socialist politician.
Revised: Asoka Mehta (24 October 1911, Bhavnagar – 10 December 1984, New Delhi) was an Indian freedom fighter and socialist politician.
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Original: 1st Lok Sabha members Category:2nd Lok Sabha members Category:4th Lok Sabha members Category:People from Bhavnagar Category:People from Bhandara Category:Praja Socialist Party politicians Category:Indians imprisoned during the Emergency (India) Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:Gujarati people Category:English-language writers from India Category:Indian National Congress (Organisation) politicians Category:Lok Sabha members from Maharasht
Revised: 1st Lok Sabha members Category:2nd Lok Sabha members Category:4th Lok Sabha members Category:People from Bhavnagar Category:People from Bhandara Category:Praja Socialist Party politicians Category:Indians imprisoned during the Emergency (India) Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:Gujarati people Category:English-language writers from India Category:Indian National Congress (Organisation) politicians Category:Lok Sabha members from Maharashtra Category:Janata Party politicia
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Original:  As the Indian delegate on the UN Human Rights Commission in 1947–48, she was responsible for changing the language of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights from "all men are created equal" (Eleanor Roosevelt’s preferred phrase) to "all human beings", highlighting the need for gender URL Hansa later went on to become the vice chairman of the Human Rights Commission of the United Nations in 1950.
Revised:  Hansa later went on to become the vice chairman of the Human Rights Commission of the United Nations in 1950.
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Original:  In some places , the very act of preparing from a crime is a criminal offense in itself, though it is generally viewed as being natural behavior for lawbreakers.  &  
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Original: In some jurisdictions, the very act of preparing from a crime is a criminal offense in itself, though it is generally viewed as being natural behavior for lawbreakers.
Revised: In some jurisdictions, the very act of preparing for a crime is a criminal offense in itself, though it is generally viewed as being natural behavior for lawbreakers.
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Original:  There is no limit on the number participating in the conspiracy and, in most countries, no requirement that any steps have been taken to put the plan into effect (compare attempts which require proximity to the full offence) .
Revised:  There is no limit on the number participating in the conspiracy and, in most countries, no requirement that any steps have been taken to put the plan into effect .
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Original:  The Criminal Law Act 1977, section 5(3)Conspiracy Law Legal Definition, USLegal, Inc."
Revised:  Legal Definition, USLegal, Inc."
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Original: Conspiracy" Defined%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Explained, The 'Lectric Law Library An example can be: "The two gangsters conspired to rob the bank down the street".
Revised: Conspiracy" Defined%DIFDELCMD < & %%% 
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Original:  In criminal law, it most commonly refers to either the act of offering goods or services, or the act of attempting to purchase such goods or services.
Revised:  In criminal law, it most commonly refers to the act of offering goods or services, or the act of attempting to purchase such goods or services.
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Original:  Stalking This can involve the criminal's act of casing or keeping the surveillance of a victim or place or item that would be involved in the crime.
Revised:  Stalking Stalking is the unwanted and repeated surveillance of a victim or place or item that would be involved in the crime.
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Original:  Lee serves as Chair of the Preparation Committee of the "PyeongChang Forum for the Earth and its Citizens", established prior to the 2018 Winter Olympics in PyeongChang.
Revised:  Lee served as Chair of the Preparation Committee of the "PyeongChang Forum for the Earth and its Citizens", established prior to the 2018 Winter Olympics in PyeongChang.
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Original:  Lee served as Chair of the Preparation Committee of the "PyeongChang Forum for the Earth and its Citizens", established prior to the 2018 Winter Olympics in PyeongChang.
Revised:  Lee served as Chair of the Preparation Committee of the "PyeongChang Forum for the Earth and its Citizens", prior to the 2018 Winter Olympics in PyeongChang.
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Original: The largest numbers of soldaderas were in Northern Mexico, where both the Federal Army (until its demise in 1914) and the revolutionary armies needing them to provision soldiers by obtaining and cooking food, nurse the wounded, and promote social cohesion.
Revised: The largest numbers of soldaderas were in Northern Mexico, where both the Federal Army (until its demise in 1914) and the revolutionary armies needed them to provision soldiers by obtaining and cooking food, nurse the wounded, and promote social cohesion.
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Original: The largest numbers of soldaderas were in Northern Mexico, where both the Federal Army (until its demise in 1914) and the revolutionary armies needing them to provision soldiers by obtaining and cooking food, nurse the wounded, and promote social cohesion.
Revised: The largest numbers of soldaderas were in Northern Mexico, where both the Federal Army (until its demise in 1914) and the revolutionary armies needing them to provision soldiers by obtaining and cooking food, nursing the wounded, and promote social cohesion.
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Original: The largest numbers of soldaderas were in Northern Mexico, where both the Federal Army (until its demise in 1914) and the revolutionary armies needing them to provision soldiers by obtaining and cooking food, nurse the wounded, and promote social cohesion.
Revised: The largest numbers of soldaderas were in Northern Mexico, where both the Federal Army (until its demise in 1914) and the revolutionary armies needing them to provision soldiers by obtaining and cooking food, nurse the wounded, and promoting social cohesion.
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Original:  Soldaderas as camp followers performed vital tasks such as taking care of the male soldiers ;
Revised:  Soldaderas as camp followers performed vital tasks such as taking care of the male soldiers :
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Original:  cooking, cleaning, setting up camp, cleaning their weapons  and so forth.
Revised:  cooking, cleaning, setting up camp, cleaning their weapons , and so forth.
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Original: Petra / Pedro Herrera One of the most famous female combatants was Petra Herrera or Petra Ruiz .Cano, "Soldaderas and Coronelas, p. 1359.
Revised: Petra / Pedro Herrera One of the most famous female combatants was Petra Herrera .Cano, "Soldaderas and Coronelas, p. 1359.
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Original: La Valentina A lesser known corrido called "La Valentina" and was based off a female soldier named Valentina Ramirez that predates the Mexican revolution.
Revised: La Valentina A lesser known corrido called "La Valentina" and was based on a female soldier named Valentina Ramirez that predates the Mexican revolution.
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Original:  In area of Morelos where Emiliano Zapata led revolutionary campesinos, the forces were primarily defensive and based in peasant villages, less like the organized armies of  movement of Northern Mexico than seasonal guerrilla warfare.
Revised:  In area of Morelos where Emiliano Zapata led revolutionary campesinos, the forces were primarily defensive and based in peasant villages, less like the organized armies of the movement of Northern Mexico than seasonal guerrilla warfare.
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Original: Ivanhoe, P.J., & Van Norden, B.W. ( Eds .) (2001).
Revised: Ivanhoe, P.J., & Van Norden, B.W. ( eds .) (2001).
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Original:  1986-87, p 19 Whatever the reason, they left Kaabu c 1335.
Revised:  1986-87, p 19 Whatever the reason, they apparently left Kaabu around 1335.
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Original:  Serer oral tradition holds that Sine never paid tribute to Jolof ref name="nd"/> but Sylviane Diouf states that "Each vassal kingdom—Walo, Takrur, Kayor, Baol, Sine, Salum, Wuli, and Niani—recognized the hegemony of Jolof and paid tribute.
Revised:  Serer oral tradition holds that Sine never paid tribute to Jolof but Sylviane Diouf states that "Each vassal kingdom—Walo, Takrur, Kayor, Baol, Sine, Salum, Wuli, and Niani—recognized the hegemony of Jolof and paid tribute.
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Original:  After the Mansa-Kaabu  Tiramakhan Traore (of Mali) conquered Kaabu, killing the last great Bainuk king – King Kikikor, he and his descendants married into the Bainuk nobility.
Revised:  After the Mansa Tiramakhan Traore (of Mali) conquered Kaabu, killing the last great Bainuk king – King Kikikor, he and his descendants married into the Bainuk nobility.
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Original:  He reigned as Maad a Sinig (king of Sine) from c. 1350 to 1370.
Revised:  He reigned as Maad a Sinig (king of Sine) from to 1370.
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Original:  After serving this Council for fifteen years as legal advisor, Maysa Wali gained the trust and confidence of the Council and the Serer people of Sine, and was nominated, elected and crowned king of Sine.
Revised:  After serving this council for fifteen years as legal advisor, Maysa Wali gained the trust and confidence of the Council and the Serer people of Sine, and was nominated, elected and crowned king of Sine.
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Original:  Professional career Current Positions Chief Executive - Stock Exchange of Mauritius Port Louis, Mauritius (1998–present) Senior Lecturer - University of Mauritius, Reduit, Mauritius (1992–present) Board Member - Treasury and Foreign Currency Management Fund Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Living people Category:Mauritian businesspeople Category:University of Illinois alum
Revised:  Professional career Current Positions Chief Executive - Stock Exchange of Mauritius Port Louis, Mauritius (1998–present) Senior Lecturer - University of Mauritius, Reduit, Mauritius (1992–present) Board Member - Treasury and Foreign Currency Management Fund Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Living people Category:Mauritian businesspeople Category:University of Illinois at Urbana–Champai
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Original: Professional career Current Positions Chief Executive -
Revised: Professional career Current positions Chief Executive -
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Original:  Stock Exchange of Mauritius Port Louis, Mauritius (1998–present) Senior Lecturer - University of Mauritius, Reduit, Mauritius (1992–present) Board Member - Treasury and Foreign Currency Management Fund Previous Position (s) Portfolio Manager- African Development Bank Abidjan (1997–1998) Lecturer - Mauritius Institute of Management, University of Surrey Port Louis (1995–1997) General Manager - National Mutual Fund Port Louis (1992–1997) Title And styles Sunil Benimadhu
Revised:  Stock Exchange of Mauritius Port Louis, Mauritius (1998–present) Senior Lecturer - University of Mauritius, Reduit, Mauritius (1992–present) Board Member - Treasury and Foreign Currency Management Fund Previous position (s) Portfolio Manager- African Development Bank Abidjan (1997–1998) Lecturer - Mauritius Institute of Management, University of Surrey Port Louis (1995–1997) General Manager - National Mutual Fund Port Louis (1992–1997) Title And styles Sunil Benimadhu
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Original:  Stock Exchange of Mauritius Port Louis, Mauritius (1998–present) Senior Lecturer - University of Mauritius, Reduit, Mauritius (1992–present) Board Member - Treasury and Foreign Currency Management Fund Previous Position (s) Portfolio Manager- African Development Bank Abidjan (1997–1998) Lecturer - Mauritius Institute of Management, University of Surrey Port Louis (1995–1997) General Manager - National Mutual Fund Port Louis (1992–1997) Title And styles Sunil Benimadhu
Revised:  Stock Exchange of Mauritius Port Louis, Mauritius (1998–present) Senior Lecturer - University of Mauritius, Reduit, Mauritius (1992–present) Board Member - Treasury and Foreign Currency Management Fund Previous Position (s) Portfolio Manager- African Development Bank Abidjan (1997–1998) Lecturer - Mauritius Institute of Management, University of Surrey Port Louis (1995–1997) General Manager - National Mutual Fund Port Louis (1992–1997) 
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Original:  McNamara, D. H. & Colton, D. J. (1969) The Treatment of Line Blanketing " Metallicity and the spectral energy distribution of O stars " ;
Revised:  McNamara, D. H. & Colton, D. J. (1969) The Treatment of Line Blanketing " Metallicity and the spectral energy distribution of O stars ;
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Original: Blanketing effect The Blanketing Effect (also referred to as : Line Blanketing or Line-Blanketing Effect) refers in Astronomy to the diminishing effecton a star's spectrum which tends to enhance its red or infrared parts, relative to a star with a non-blanketed spectrum.
Revised:  The Blanketing Effect (also referred to as : Line Blanketing or Line-Blanketing Effect) refers in Astronomy to the diminishing effecton a star's spectrum which tends to enhance its red or infrared parts, relative to a star with a non-blanketed spectrum.
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Original: Blanketing effect The Blanketing Effect (also referred to as : Line Blanketing or Line-Blanketing Effect) refers in Astronomy to the diminishing effecton a star's spectrum which tends to enhance its red or infrared parts, relative to a star with a non-blanketed spectrum.
Revised: Blanketing effect The blanketing effect (also referred to as : Line Blanketing or Line-Blanketing Effect) refers in Astronomy to the diminishing effecton a star's spectrum which tends to enhance its red or infrared parts, relative to a star with a non-blanketed spectrum.
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Original: Blanketing effect The Blanketing Effect (also referred to as : Line Blanketing or Line-Blanketing Effect) refers in Astronomy to the diminishing effecton a star's spectrum which tends to enhance its red or infrared parts, relative to a star with a non-blanketed spectrum.
Revised: Blanketing effect The Blanketing Effect (also referred to as line blanketing or the line-blanketing effect) is the enhancement of the red or infrared parts, relative to a star with a non-blanketed spectrum.
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Original: Blanketing effect The Blanketing Effect (also referred to as : Line Blanketing or Line-Blanketing Effect) refers in Astronomy to the diminishing effecton a star's spectrum which tends to enhance its red or infrared parts, relative to a star with a non-blanketed spectrum.
Revised: Blanketing effect The Blanketing Effect (also referred to as : Line Blanketing or Line-Blanketing Effect) refers in Astronomy to the diminishing effecton a star's spectrum which tends to enhance its red or infrared regions of a stellar spectrum at the expense of the other regions, with an overall diminishing effect on the whole spectrum.
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Original:  The term originates in a 1928 article by Milne where the author describes the effect on a star due to the metalsIn Astronomy, the term metals is used to refer to any element heavier than He. present in its outer layers .
Revised:  The term originates in a 1928 article by astrophysicist Edward Arthur Milne, where it was used to describe the effects that the astronomical metals in a star's outer regions had on that star's spectrum .
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Original:  The Observatory, vol. 51, pag. 8896 (1928) These components are responsible for generating most of the absorption lines present in  a star's spectrum which will tend to absorb a fraction of the energy emitted by it, thus reducing the stars energetic output (referred to as the blocking effect) , and re-emit that energy back increasing the effective temperature of the continuum (an effect called backwarming ) .
Revised:  The Observatory, vol. 51, pag. 8896 (1928) The name arose because the absorption lines present in a star's spectrum which will tend to absorb a fraction of the energy emitted by it, thus reducing the stars energetic output (referred to as the blocking effect) , and re-emit that energy back increasing the effective temperature of the continuum (an effect called backwarming ) .
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Original:  The Observatory, vol. 51, pag. 8896 (1928) These components are responsible for generating most of the absorption lines present in  a star's spectrum which will tend to absorb a fraction of the energy emitted by it, thus reducing the stars energetic output (referred to as the blocking effect) , and re-emit that energy back increasing the effective temperature of the continuum (an effect called backwarming ) .
Revised:  The Observatory, vol. 51, pag. 8896 (1928) These components are responsible for generating most of the absorption lines present in a star's spectral absorption lines, absorb a fraction of the energy emitted by it, thus reducing the stars energetic output (referred to as the blocking effect) , and re-emit that energy back increasing the effective temperature of the continuum (an effect called backwarming ) .
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Original:  The Observatory, vol. 51, pag. 8896 (1928) These components are responsible for generating most of the absorption lines present in  a star's spectrum which will tend to absorb a fraction of the energy emitted by it, thus reducing the stars energetic output (referred to as the blocking effect) , and re-emit that energy back increasing the effective temperature of the continuum (an effect called backwarming ) .
Revised:  The Observatory, vol. 51, pag. 8896 (1928) These components are responsible for generating most of the absorption lines present in a star's spectrum which will tend to absorb a fraction of the star's radiant energy (a phenomenon known as the blocking effect) , and re-emit that energy back increasing the effective temperature of the continuum (an effect called backwarming ) .
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Original:  The Observatory, vol. 51, pag. 8896 (1928) These components are responsible for generating most of the absorption lines present in  a star's spectrum which will tend to absorb a fraction of the energy emitted by it, thus reducing the stars energetic output (referred to as the blocking effect) , and re-emit that energy back increasing the effective temperature of the continuum (an effect called backwarming ) .
Revised:  The Observatory, vol. 51, pag. 8896 (1928) These components are responsible for generating most of the absorption lines present in a star's spectrum which will tend to absorb a fraction of the energy emitted by it, thus reducing the stars energetic output (referred to as the blocking effect) and then re-emit that energy back increasing the effective temperature of the continuum (an effect called backwarming ) .
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Original:  The blanketing effect is thus closely related to the metallicityindex of a star, which gives precisely this proportion of metals present in a star's outer layers.
Revised:  The blanketing effect is thus highly dependent on metallicity, the fraction of astronomical bodies by mass that are composed of astronomical metals.
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Original:  Eggen, Olin J., MNRAS, Vol. 119, p.278 (1959) References : Category:Astrono
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Original:  The Observatory, vol. 51, pag. 8896 (1928) The name arose because the absorption lines act as a "blanket", causing the continuum temperature of the spectrum to rise over what it would have been if these lines were not present.
Revised:  The name arose because the absorption lines act as a "blanket", causing the continuum temperature of the spectrum to rise over what it would have been if these lines were not present.
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Original:  |volume=51|pages=88–96|title=The total absorption in the Sun's reversing layer|journal=The Obsevatory|author=Milne, E. A.
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