wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  First, we describe the underlying algorithm, "Wood's Method," which uses quadratic optimization and a constraint set to fit a transition matrix to age/ sex population counts.
Revised:  First, we describe the underlying algorithm, "Wood's Method," which uses quadratic optimization to fit a transition matrix to age/ sex population counts.
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Original:  Second, we establish generic constraint sets that make the algorithm useable for human population age- and sex-specific forecasting.
Revised:  Second, we use demographic theory to create constraint sets that make the algorithm useable for human population age- and sex-specific forecasting.
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Original: In this paper, we present a technique for generating Leslie transition matrices from simple age / sex population counts, using an implementation of "Wood's Method" [ Wood 97 ];
Revised: In this paper, we present a technique for generating Leslie transition matrices from simple age and sex population counts, using an implementation of "Wood's Method" [ Wood 97 ];
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Original: In this paper, we present a technique for generating Leslie transition matrices from simple age / sex population counts, using an implementation of "Wood's Method" [ Wood 97 ];
Revised: In this paper, we present a technique for generating Leslie transition matrices from simple age / sex population counts, using an implementation of "Wood's Method" [ wood ];
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Original:  these matrices can be used to automatically forecast population by age and sex (the "cohort component" method) with simple matrix multiplication  .
Revised:  these matrices can forecast population by age and sex (the "cohort component" method) with simple matrix multiplication .
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Original:  these matrices can be used to automatically forecast population by age and sex (the "cohort component" method) with simple matrix multiplication  .
Revised:  these matrices can be used to automatically forecast population by age and sex (the "cohort component" method) using simple matrix multiplication .
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Original:  First, we describe the underlying algorithm, "Wood's Method," which uses quadratic optimization to fit a transition matrix to age / sex population counts.
Revised:  First, we describe the underlying algorithm, "Wood's Method," which uses quadratic optimization to fit a transition matrix to age and sex population counts.
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Original:  Second, we use demographic theory to create constraint sets that make the algorithm useable for human cohort component forecasting .
Revised:  Second, we use demographic theory to create constraint sets that make the algorithm useable for human populations .
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Original:  Finally, we use the method to automatically forecast 3,120 US counties and show that Wood's method holds promise for programmatically generating Leslie transition matrices and population forecasts.
Revised:  Finally, we use the method to forecast 3,120 US counties and show that Wood's method holds promise for programmatically generating Leslie transition matrices and population forecasts.
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Original:  Finally, we use the method to automatically forecast 3,120 US counties and show that Wood's method holds promise for programmatically generating Leslie transition matrices and population forecasts.
Revised:  Finally, we use the method to automatically forecast 3,120 US counties and show that it holds promise for programmatically generating Leslie transition matrices and population forecasts.
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Original:  it also shows the promise of constrained optimization techniques for demographic modeling.
Revised:  it also shows the promise of constrained optimization techniques in demographic modeling.
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Original:  Using averaging techniques due to Kurtz (1992), we give a new proof of the convergence of the individual based model to the Trait substitution sequence of Metz et al. (1992) and rigorously proved by Champagnat (2006): assuming that "invasion implies fixation ", we obtain in the limit a process that jumps from one population equilibrum to another one when mutations occur and invade the population.
Revised:  Using averaging techniques due to Kurtz (1992), we give a new proof of the convergence of the individual based model to the trait substitution sequence of Metz et al. (1992) and rigorously proved by Champagnat (2006): assuming that "invasion implies fixation ", we obtain in the limit a process that jumps from one population equilibrum to another one when mutations occur and invade the population.
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Original:  Using averaging techniques due to Kurtz (1992), we give a new proof of the convergence of the individual based model to the Trait substitution sequence of Metz et al. (1992) and rigorously proved by Champagnat (2006): assuming that "invasion implies fixation ", we obtain in the limit a process that jumps from one population equilibrum to another one when mutations occur and invade the population.
Revised:  Using averaging techniques due to Kurtz (1992), we give a new proof of the convergence of the individual based model to the Trait substitution sequence of Metz et al. (1992) and rigorously proved by Champagnat (2006): rigging the model such that "invasion implies fixation ", we obtain in the limit a process that jumps from one population equilibrum to another one when mutations occur and invade the population.
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Original:  Using averaging techniques due to Kurtz (1992), we give a new proof of the convergence of the individual based model to the Trait substitution sequence of Metz et al. (1992) and rigorously proved by Champagnat (2006): assuming that "invasion implies fixation ", we obtain in the limit a process that jumps from one population equilibrum to another one when mutations occur and invade the population.
Revised:  Using averaging techniques due to Kurtz (1992), we give a new proof of the convergence of the individual based model to the Trait substitution sequence of Metz et al. (1992) and rigorously proved by Champagnat (2006): assuming that "invasion implies substitution ", we obtain in the limit a process that jumps from one population equilibrum to another one when mutations occur and invade the population.
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Original:  Using averaging techniques due to Kurtz (1992), we give a new proof of the convergence of the individual based model to the Trait substitution sequence of Metz et al. (1992) and rigorously proved by Champagnat (2006): assuming that "invasion implies fixation ", we obtain in the limit a process that jumps from one population equilibrum to another one when mutations occur and invade the population.
Revised:  Using averaging techniques due to Kurtz (1992), we give a new proof of the convergence of the individual based model to the Trait substitution sequence of Metz et al. (1992) and rigorously proved by Champagnat (2006): assuming that "invasion implies fixation ", we obtain in the limit a process that jumps from one population equilibrium to another when mutations occur and invade the population.
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Original: This paper presents preliminary results of a newly developed methodology and a software tool for parametric design of complex architectural objects, so called digital or algorithmic forms.
Revised: This paper presents a methodology and software tools for parametric design of complex architectural objects, so called digital or algorithmic forms.
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Original: This paper presents preliminary results of a newly developed methodology and a software tool for parametric design of complex architectural objects, so called digital or algorithmic forms.
Revised: This paper presents preliminary results of a newly developed methodology and a software tool for parametric design of complex architectural objects, called digital or algorithmic forms.
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Original:  In order to provide a maximally flexible solution , the proposed design philosophy yields two open source utilities Donkey and MIDAS written in Grashopper algorithm editor and C++, respectively, that are to be linked with a scripting-based architectural modellers Rhinoceros (C), AutoCAD(C) and the open source Finite Element solver OOFEM.
Revised:  In order to provide a flexible tool , the proposed design philosophy yields two open source utilities Donkey and MIDAS written in Grashopper algorithm editor and C++, respectively, that are to be linked with a scripting-based architectural modellers Rhinoceros (C), AutoCAD(C) and the open source Finite Element solver OOFEM.
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Original:  In order to provide a maximally flexible solution , the proposed design philosophy yields two open source utilities Donkey and MIDAS written in Grashopper algorithm editor and C++, respectively, that are to be linked with a scripting-based architectural modellers Rhinoceros (C), AutoCAD(C) and the open source Finite Element solver OOFEM.
Revised:  In order to provide a maximally flexible solution , the proposed design philosophy involves two open source utilities Donkey and MIDAS written in Grashopper algorithm editor and C++, respectively, that are to be linked with a scripting-based architectural modellers Rhinoceros (C), AutoCAD(C) and the open source Finite Element solver OOFEM.
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Original:  In order to provide a maximally flexible solution , the proposed design philosophy yields two open source utilities Donkey and MIDAS written in Grashopper algorithm editor and C++, respectively, that are to be linked with a scripting-based architectural modellers Rhinoceros (C), AutoCAD(C) and the open source Finite Element solver OOFEM.
Revised:  In order to provide a maximally flexible solution , the proposed design philosophy yields two open source utilities Donkey and MIDAS written in Grasshopper algorithm editor and C++, respectively, that are to be linked with a scripting-based architectural modellers Rhinoceros (C), AutoCAD(C) and the open source Finite Element solver OOFEM.
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Original:  The emphasis is  on the mechanical response of designed objects in order to provide architects with a consistent learning framework and wise insight into structural behaviour of their artworks .
Revised:  The emphasis is put on the mechanical response of designed objects in order to provide architects with a consistent learning framework and wise insight into structural behaviour of their artworks .
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Original:  The emphasis is  on the mechanical response of designed objects in order to provide architects with a consistent learning framework and wise insight into structural behaviour of their artworks .
Revised:  The emphasis is on the mechanical response in order to provide architects with a consistent learning framework and wise insight into structural behaviour of their artworks .
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Original:  The emphasis is  on the mechanical response of designed objects in order to provide architects with a consistent learning framework and wise insight into structural behaviour of their artworks .
Revised:  The emphasis is on the mechanical response of designed objects in order to provide architects with a consistent learning framework and an insight into structural behaviour of their artworks .
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Original:  The emphasis is  on the mechanical response of designed objects in order to provide architects with a consistent learning framework and wise insight into structural behaviour of their artworks .
Revised:  The emphasis is on the mechanical response of designed objects in order to provide architects with a consistent learning framework and wise insight into structural behaviour of designed objects .
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Original:  As demonstrated on several case studies, the combination of the utilities may handle objects of considerable structural complexity and boosts the algorithmic architectural design in terms of accelerating the process of finding procedural design parameters from orders of weeks to days or hours.
Revised:  As demonstrated on three case studies, the combination of the utilities may handle objects of considerable structural complexity and boosts the algorithmic architectural design in terms of accelerating the process of finding procedural design parameters from orders of weeks to days or hours.
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Original:  As demonstrated on several case studies, the combination of the utilities may handle objects of considerable structural complexity and boosts the algorithmic architectural design in terms of accelerating the process of finding procedural design parameters from orders of weeks to days or hours.
Revised:  As demonstrated on several case studies, the proposed modular solution is capable of handling objects of considerable structural complexity and boosts the algorithmic architectural design in terms of accelerating the process of finding procedural design parameters from orders of weeks to days or hours.
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Original:  As demonstrated on several case studies, the combination of the utilities may handle objects of considerable structural complexity and boosts the algorithmic architectural design in terms of accelerating the process of finding procedural design parameters from orders of weeks to days or hours.
Revised:  As demonstrated on several case studies, the combination of the utilities may handle objects of considerable structural complexity , thereby accelerating the process of finding procedural design parameters from orders of weeks to days or hours.
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Original:  We prove that (n-1)! is a tight upper bound for finite , cofinite and reverse definite languages , and that it can be reached only if the alphabet size is greater than or equal to (n-1)!-  (n-2)!.
Revised:  We prove that (n-1)! is a tight upper bound for finite /cofinite languages and that it can be reached only if the alphabet size is greater than or equal to (n-1)!- (n-2)!.
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Original:  Multiplets characterized by an high value will be associated to informational circuits present in the system, with an informational character (synergetic or redundant) which can be associated to the sign of the contribution.
Revised:  Multiplets characterized by an high value will be associated to informational circuits present in the system, with an informational character which can be associated to the sign of the contribution.
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Original: Motivation : Identification of causal SNPs in most genome wide association studies relies on approaches that consider each SNP individually.
Revised: Background : Identification of causal SNPs in most genome wide association studies relies on approaches that consider each SNP individually.
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Original:  Increasingly, modern regression methods are employed for SNP selection that consider all markers simultaneously and thus take account of dependencies among SNPs.
Revised:  Increasingly, modern regression methods are employed for SNP selection that consider all markers simultaneously and thus incorporate dependencies among SNPs.
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Original:  Results: For estimating CAR scores from high-dimensional data we introduce a novel computationally efficient procedure  . Subsequently, we conduct a comprehensive comparison study comprising five advanced regression approaches (boosting, lasso, NEG, MCP, and CAR score regression ) and a univariate approach (marginal correlation) to find true causal SNPs in data published by the GAW17 consortium.
Revised:  Results: For estimating CAR scores from high-dimensional data we introduce a novel computationally efficient procedure . Subsequently, we conduct a comprehensive comparison study including five advanced regression approaches (boosting, lasso, NEG, MCP, and CAR score regression ) and a univariate approach (marginal correlation) to find true causal SNPs in data published by the GAW17 consortium.
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Original:  Results: For estimating CAR scores from high-dimensional data we introduce a novel computationally efficient procedure  . Subsequently, we conduct a comprehensive comparison study comprising five advanced regression approaches (boosting, lasso, NEG, MCP, and CAR score regression ) and a univariate approach (marginal correlation) to find true causal SNPs in data published by the GAW17 consortium.
Revised:  Results: For estimating CAR scores from high-dimensional data we introduce a novel computationally efficient procedure . Subsequently, we conduct a comprehensive comparison study comprising five advanced regression approaches (boosting, lasso, NEG, MCP, and CAR score ) and a univariate approach (marginal correlation) to find true causal SNPs in data published by the GAW17 consortium.
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Original:  Results: For estimating CAR scores from high-dimensional data we introduce a novel computationally efficient procedure  . Subsequently, we conduct a comprehensive comparison study comprising five advanced regression approaches (boosting, lasso, NEG, MCP, and CAR score regression ) and a univariate approach (marginal correlation) to find true causal SNPs in data published by the GAW17 consortium.
Revised:  Results: For estimating CAR scores from high-dimensional data we introduce a novel computationally efficient procedure . Subsequently, we conduct a comprehensive comparison study comprising five advanced regression approaches (boosting, lasso, NEG, MCP, and CAR score regression ) and a univariate approach (marginal correlation) to determine the effectiveness in finding true causal SNPs in data published by the GAW17 consortium.
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Original:  Availability: R code to replicate the complete analysis is available from URL 
Revised:  Availability: R code to replicate the complete analysis is available from URL .
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Original:  In this paper we propose a theory of consciousness as relations defined by typical data.
Revised:  We propose a partial theory of consciousness as relations defined by typical data.
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Original:  Whilst the proposed theory may not be a complete candidate for the theoretical base of consciousness it does provide well defined founding principles that can be applied and tested both theoretically and experimentally.
Revised:  The proposed theory can be applied and tested both theoretically and experimentally.
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Original: We have proposed a new toy model of a heteropolymer chain capable of forming a cactus-like hierarchical secondary structure typical for RNA molecules.
Revised: We propose a new toy model of a heteropolymer chain capable of forming a cactus-like hierarchical secondary structure typical for RNA molecules.
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Original: We have proposed a new toy model of a heteropolymer chain capable of forming a cactus-like hierarchical secondary structure typical for RNA molecules.
Revised: We have proposed a new toy model of a heteropolymer chain capable of forming planar secondary structures typical for RNA molecules.
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Original:  The specific feature of this model consists in the fact, that the sequential intervals between neighboring  along a chain monomers are considered as quenched random variables.
Revised:  In this model the sequential intervals between neighboring along a chain monomers are considered as quenched random variables.
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Original:  The specific feature of this model consists in the fact, that the sequential intervals between neighboring  along a chain monomers are considered as quenched random variables.
Revised:  The specific feature of this model consists in the fact, that the sequential intervals between neighboring monomers along a chain monomers are considered as quenched random variables.
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Original:  The specific feature of this model consists in the fact, that the sequential intervals between neighboring  along a chain monomers are considered as quenched random variables.
Revised:  The specific feature of this model consists in the fact, that the sequential intervals between neighboring along a chain are considered as quenched random variables.
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Original:  Using the optimization procedure for a special class of concave-type potentials, borrowed from optimal transport analysis, we have derived the stochastic differential equation for the ground state free energy of the chain .
Revised:  Using the optimization procedure for a special class of concave--type potentials, borrowed from optimal transport analysis, we have derived the stochastic differential equation for the ground state free energy of the chain .
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Original:  We present efficient algorithms for computing parity constrained orientations with disjoint exact or subset conflict pairs and with demands .
Revised:  We present efficient algorithms for computing parity constrained orientations with disjoint exact or subset conflict pairs .
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Original: A system responding to a stochastic driving signal can be interpreted as computing, by means of its dynamics, an (implicit ) model of the environmental variables.
Revised: A system responding to a stochastic driving signal can be interpreted as computing, by means of its dynamics, an implicit model of the environmental variables.
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Original:  The remaining nonpredictive information reflects model complexity that does not improve predictive power, and  represents the ineffectiveness of the model.
Revised:  The remaining nonpredictive information reflects model complexity that does not improve predictive power, and thus represents the ineffectiveness of the model.
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Original:  They highlight a profound connection between the effective use of information and efficient thermodynamic operation: any system constructed to keep memory about its environment and to operate energetically efficiently has to be predictive.
Revised:  They highlight a profound connection between the effective use of information and efficient thermodynamic operation: any system constructed to keep memory about its environment and to operate with maximal energetic efficiency has to be predictive.
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Original:  We expose the fundamental equivalence between this model inefficiency and thermodynamic inefficiency, measured by the energy dissipated during the interaction between system and environment .
Revised:  We expose the fundamental equivalence between this model inefficiency and thermodynamic inefficiency, measured by dissipation .
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Original: The Vehicle-to-Vehicle (V2V) propagation channel has significant implications on the design and performance of novel communication protocols for Vehicular Ad Hoc Networks ( VANET ).
Revised: The Vehicle-to-Vehicle (V2V) propagation channel has significant implications on the design and performance of novel communication protocols for Vehicular Ad Hoc Networks ( VANETs ).
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Original:  Extensive research efforts have been made to develop and implement V2V channel models for advanced VANET system simulators  .
Revised:  Extensive research efforts have been made to develop V2V channel models for advanced VANET system simulators .
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Original:  Extensive research efforts have been made to develop and implement V2V channel models for advanced VANET system simulators  .
Revised:  Extensive research efforts have been made to develop and implement V2V channel models to be implemented in advanced VANET system simulators .
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Original:  Video information from the measurements is used to separate the line-of-sight (LOS) condition from the obstructed line-of-sight (OLOS) by vehicles  and non line-of-sight (NLOS) by buildings  .
Revised:  The measurement data is separated for the situations line-of-sight (LOS) condition from the obstructed line-of-sight (OLOS) by vehicles and non line-of-sight (NLOS) by buildings .
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