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Original:  The Higher Education Support Amendment (Abolition of Compulsory Up-Front Student Union Fees) Bill 2005, commonly known as "voluntary student unionism" or VSU, will have the effect of making the automatic joining of university students into the respective union , and the consequent abolition of the payment of union fees , which often go to amenities and services provided by the union .
Revised:  The Higher Education Support Amendment (Abolition of Compulsory Up-Front Student Union Fees) Bill 2005, commonly known as "voluntary student unionism" or VSU, will have the effect of making the automatic joining of university students into the respective union , and the consequent abolition of the payment of union fees , which often go to amenities and services provided the student unions .
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Original: Industry and Empire ' showcases Scotland's significant place in the world as a source of heavy engineering work in the form of rail engineering and shipbuilding – key components in the building of the . Naturally, whisky was another globally-recognised export introduced to the world during empire-building.
Revised: Industry and Empire showcases Scotland's significant place in the world as a source of heavy engineering work in the form of rail engineering and shipbuilding – key components in the building of the . Naturally, whisky was another globally-recognised export introduced to the world during empire-building.
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Original:  Lastly, Scotland: A Changing Nation '' collects less-tangible items, including personal accounts, from the country's journey through the 20th century;
Revised:  Lastly, Scotland: A Changing Nation collects less-tangible items, including personal accounts, from the country's journey through the 20th century;
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Original:  Captain Cook's clock, A Shelton regulator, taken on his first voyage to the Pacific to observe the transit of Venus in Tahiti.
Revised:  Captain Cook's clock, a Shelton regulator, taken on his first voyage to the Pacific to observe the transit of Venus in Tahiti.
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Original:  She says the Commenwealth should not expect any cooperation from her Government.
Revised:  She says the Commonwealth should not expect any cooperation from her Government.
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Original:  Mr Hill says waste should be stored closer to Lucas Heights in Sydney where it is generated  
Revised:  Mr Hill says waste should be stored closer to Lucas Heights in Sydney where it is generated . 
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Original: The two bills override the Northern Territory's objection to the radioactive waste dump after the South Australian government opposed the federal government's preferred site near Woomera.
Revised: The two bills override the Northern Territory's objection to the radioactive waste dump after the South Australian government opposed a previous preferred site near Woomera.
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Original:   Federal Labor opposition MP, Warren Snowdon, says it is the first time since 1978 that Territory law has been overridden.
Revised:  According to Federal Labor opposition MP, Warren Snowdon, says it is the first time since 1978 that Territory law has been overridden.
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Original:   Federal Labor opposition MP, Warren Snowdon, says it is the first time since 1978 that Territory law has been overridden.
Revised:  Federal Labor opposition MP, Warren Snowdon, it is the first time since 1978 that Territory law has been overridden.
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Original:  The Territory Labor Government has also been a staunch opponent of the plan, saying a nuclear dump will expose residents to a new security threat.
Revised:  The Territory Labor Government has also been an opponent of the plan, saying a nuclear dump will expose residents to a new security threat.
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Original: The European Union, Canada, Indonesia and other nations at the United Natons climate talks in Montreal have put pressure on the United States.
Revised: The European Union, Canada, Indonesia and other nations at the United Nations' climate talks in Montreal have put pressure on the United States.
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Original:   Schwarzenegger, who is 58 years of age, underwent surgery in 1997 related to a valve in his heart.
Revised:  He then was heard shouting, "I TOLD YOU I'D BE BACK." Schwarzenegger, who is 58 years of age, underwent surgery in 1997 related to a valve in his heart.
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Original: 107px|Arnold Schwarzenegger Arnold Schwarzenegger, Republican governor of California, bodybuilder and famous Hollywood celebrity, was hospitalized this week around midnight local time, at the advice of his doctor.
Revised:  Arnold Schwarzenegger, Republican governor of California, bodybuilder and famous Hollywood celebrity, was hospitalized this week around midnight local time, at the advice of his doctor.
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Original:  Payne was said to be "very distressed" at the allegations
Revised:  Payne was said to be "very distressed" by the allegations
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Original:  Mulcaire himself was sentenced to prison in January 2007, as well as Clive Goodman, the royal editor for the NotW  
Revised:  Mulcaire himself was sentenced to prison in January 2007, as well as Clive Goodman, the royal editor for the NotW . 
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Original: The , a British police forced based in the capital city of London, has announced its intention to commence a new investigation related to allegations of computer hacking they have received .
Revised: The , a British police force based in the capital city of London, has announced its intention to commence a new investigation related to allegations of computer hacking they have received .
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Original: The , a British police forced based in the capital city of London, has announced its intention to commence a new investigation related to allegations of computer hacking they have received .
Revised: The , a British police forced based in the capital city of London, has announced its intention to commence a new investigation related to allegations of computer hacking .
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Original:  The force has received numerous allegations of computer and email hacking relating to journalists since January of this year, prompting the launched of the probe, codenamed Operation Tuleta .
Revised:  The force has received numerous allegations of computer and email hacking relating to journalists since January of this year, prompting the launch of the probe, codenamed Operation Tuleta .
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Original:  The force has received numerous allegations of computer and email hacking relating to journalists since January of this year, prompting the launched of the probe, codenamed Operation Tuleta .
Revised:  The force has received numerous allegations of computer and email hacking relating to journalists since January of this year, prompting the launched of the probe, codenamed .
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Original:  According to a spokesperson for , computer hacking allegations had already been brought into account  but now, "some aspects of that operation are being moved towards investigation".
Revised:  According to a spokesperson for , computer hacking allegations have already been brought into account but now, "some aspects of that operation are being moved towards investigation".
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Original:  According to a spokesperson for , computer hacking allegations had already been brought into account  but now, "some aspects of that operation are being moved towards investigation".
Revised:  According to a spokesperson for , computer hacking allegations had already been brought into account , but now, "some aspects of that operation are being moved towards investigation".
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Original:  These allegations had occurred amongst the progression of Operation Weeting, which was investigating alleged phone hacking offences .
Revised:  These allegations occurred during , which has investigated .
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Original:  The Metropolitan Police has reported that the computer hacking claims were not within the remit of the phone hacking allegation probe, so a separate investigation would have to be launched.
Revised:  The Metropolitan Police said that the computer hacking claims were not within the remit of the phone hacking allegation probe, so a separate investigation would have to be launched.
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Original:  The Metropolitan Police has reported that the computer hacking claims were not within the remit of the phone hacking allegation probe, so a separate investigation would have to be launched.
Revised:  The Metropolitan Police has reported that the computer hacking claims were not within the remit of the phone hacking allegation probe, so a separate investigation had to be launched.
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Original:  Operation Tuleta consists of a fresh team of detectives, who will provide information to Operation Weeting deputy assistant commissioner Sue Akers . Meanwhile, Glenn Mulcaire, a private investigator for  former British publication , is currently one of the most significant figures in the phone hacking scandal investigation.
Revised:  Operation Tuleta consists of a fresh team of detectives, who will provide information to Operation Weeting deputy assistant commissioner . Meanwhile, Glenn Mulcaire, a private investigator for former British publication , is currently one of the most significant figures in the phone hacking scandal investigation.
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Original:  Operation Tuleta consists of a fresh team of detectives, who will provide information to Operation Weeting deputy assistant commissioner Sue Akers . Meanwhile, Glenn Mulcaire, a private investigator for  former British publication , is currently one of the most significant figures in the phone hacking scandal investigation.
Revised:  Operation Tuleta consists of a fresh team of detectives, who will provide information to Operation Weeting deputy assistant commissioner Sue Akers . Meanwhile, Glenn Mulcaire, a private investigator for the former British publication , is currently one of the most significant figures in the phone hacking scandal investigation.
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Original:  His legal representatives have stated that Mulcaire was proceeding "on the instructions of others".
Revised:  His legal representatives have stated that he was proceeding "on the instructions of others".
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Original:  Sara Payne , the mother of , has been informed of the possibility of Mulcaire hacking into her phone and gathering her contact information.
Revised:  , the mother of , has been informed of the possibility of Mulcaire hacking into her phone and gathering her contact information.
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Original:  Sara Payne , the mother of , has been informed of the possibility of Mulcaire hacking into her phone and gathering her contact information.
Revised:  Sara Payne , the mother of , has been informed that Mulcaire possibly hacked into her phone and gathering her contact information.
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Original:  Sara Payne , the mother of , has been informed of the possibility of Mulcaire hacking into her phone and gathering her contact information.
Revised:  Sara Payne , the mother of , has been informed of the possibility of Mulcaire hacking into her phone and gathered her contact information.
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Original:  Mulcaire himself was sentenced to prison in January 2007 , as well as Clive Goodman, the royal editor for the NotW.
Revised:  Mulcaire himself was sentenced to prison in January 2007 along with , the royal editor for the NotW.
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Original:  The final edition of the NotW was published this July, amongst the phone hacking scandal within News Corporation.
Revised:  The final edition of the NotW was published this July, amid the phone hacking scandal within News Corporation.
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Original:  A public inquiry relating to the affair was launch , triggered by allegations of phone hacking and police corrupting, amongst other issues relating to the regulation of the media and the ownership of it
Revised:  A public inquiry relating to the affair was launched , triggered by allegations of phone hacking and police corrupting, amongst other issues relating to the regulation of the media and the ownership of it
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Original:  A public inquiry relating to the affair was launch , triggered by allegations of phone hacking and police corrupting, amongst other issues relating to the regulation of the media and the ownership of it
Revised:  A public inquiry relating to the affair was launch , triggered by allegations of phone hacking and police corruption among other issues related to the regulation of the media and the ownership of it
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Original:  A public inquiry relating to the affair was launch , triggered by allegations of phone hacking and police corrupting, amongst other issues relating to the regulation of the media and the ownership of it
Revised:  A public inquiry relating to the affair was launch , triggered by allegations of phone hacking and police corrupting, amongst other issues relating to the regulation and ownership of the media
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Original:  , the mother of , has been informed that Mulcaire possibly hacked into her phone and gathered her contact information.
Revised:  , the mother of the , was informed that Mulcaire possibly hacked into her phone and gathered her contact information.
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Original:  A public inquiry relating to the affair was launched, triggered by allegations of phone hacking and police corruption among other issues related to the regulation and ownership of the media
Revised:  A public inquiry relating to the affair was launched, triggered by allegations of phone hacking and police corruption 
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Original:  Vidro missed almost half of the 2005 season with leg problems  
Revised:  Vidro missed almost half of the 2005 season with leg problems . 
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Original: The Parliamentary Assembly of the Council of Europe (PACE), Europe's leading human rights watchdog group, plans to use satellite images and flight logs as part of its investigation into claims that the United States maintains secret prisons in Council of Europenations .
Revised: The Parliamentary Assembly of the Council of Europe (PACE), Europe's leading human rights watchdog group, plans to use satellite images and flight logs as part of its investigation into claims that the United States maintains secret prisons in Europe .
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Original:  The European Union (EU) has granted PACE access to EU archived satellite images and flight logs to help determine whether aircraft linked with CIA secret detention centers have been using European airspace  
Revised:  The European Union (EU) has granted PACE access to EU archived satellite images and flight logs to help determine whether aircraft linked with CIA secret detention centers have been using European airspace . 
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Original: On Sunday, London-based football club Chelsea F.C. defeated local rivals Arsenal F.C. 0–1 in a Barclays match played at Arsenal's . File photo of Diego Costa who scored the only goal of the match The Gunners were reduced to ten men in the 18th minute. brought down after a pass from gave Costa a good opportunity to run towards Arsenal's goal, and the referee showed Mertesacker the .
Revised: On Sunday, London-based club Chelsea F.C. defeated local rivals Arsenal F.C. 0–1 in a Barclays match played at Arsenal's . File photo of Diego Costa who scored the only goal of the match The Gunners were reduced to ten men in the 18th minute. brought down after a pass from gave Costa a good opportunity to run towards Arsenal's goal, and the referee showed Mertesacker the .
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Original: On Sunday, London-based club Chelsea F.C. defeated local rivals Arsenal F.C. 0–1 in a Barclays match played at Arsenal's . File photo of Diego Costa who scored the only goal of the match The Gunners were reduced to ten men in the 18th minute. brought down after a pass from gave Costa a good opportunity to run towards Arsenal's goal, and the referee showed Mertesacker the .
Revised: On Sunday, London-based club Chelsea F.C. defeated local rivals Arsenal F.C. 0–1 in a match played at Arsenal's . File photo of Diego Costa who scored the only goal of the match The Gunners were reduced to ten men in the 18th minute. brought down after a pass from gave Costa a good opportunity to run towards Arsenal's goal, and the referee showed Mertesacker the .
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Original:  Wenger said, "He got him sent off - you cannot say it's not true."
Revised:  Wenger said, "He got him sent off — you cannot say it's not true."
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Original:  In the previous meeting between the sides, received a red card.
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Original:  The match ended 0–1, and 's team, who had had the greater share of possession of the ball during the match, collected three points .
Revised:  The match ended 0–1, and 's team, who had had the greater share of possession of the ball during the match, collected .
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Original: The says that a sizeable Earthquake has occurred less than 140 kilometres (83 miles) from the Northeastern coast of Papua New Guinea.
Revised: The says that a sizeable earthquake has occurred less than 140 kilometres (83 miles) from the Northeastern coast of Papua New Guinea.
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Original:  The initial indication from the USGS is that the earthquake registered at Magnitude 6.8 at a depth of just 16.8 kilometres (10.4 miles).
Revised:  The initial indication from the USGS is that the earthquake registered at magnitude 6.8 at a depth of just 16.8 kilometres (10.4 miles).
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Original:  It struck at 23: 38UTC (00.38 British Summer Time, 09.38 PNGT) offshore between the areas of , the capital city of and , the capital city of the .
Revised:  It struck at 23: 38 UTC (00.38 British Summer Time, 09.38 PNGT) offshore between the areas of , the capital city of and , the capital city of the .
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Original:  The did not issue a Tsunami alert, and there are no initial reports of casualties or damage
Revised:  The did not issue a tsunami alert, and there are no initial reports of casualties or damage
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Original: It struck at 23:38 UTC (00.38 British Summer Time, 09.38 PNGT ) offshore between the areas of , the capital city of and , the capital city of the .
Revised: It struck at 23:38 UTC (00.38 British Summer Time, 09.38 PGT ) offshore between the areas of , the capital city of and , the capital city of the .
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Original: It struck at 23:38 UTC (00.38 British Summer Time, 09.38 PGT) offshore between the areas of , the capital city of and , the capital city of the .
Revised: It struck at offshore between the areas of , the capital city of and , the capital city of the .
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Original:  The issued a minor Tsunami warning, stating " " No destructive widespread tsunami threat exists based on historical earthquake and tsunami data.
Revised:  The issued a minor Tsunami warning, stating " No destructive widespread tsunami threat exists based on historical earthquake and tsunami data.
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Original:  However, earthquakes of this size sometimes generate local tsunamis that can be destructive along coasts located within 100 kilometres of the earthquake epicentre.  
Revised:  However, earthquakes of this size sometimes generate local tsunamis that can be destructive along coasts located within 100 kilometres of the earthquake epicentre. " 
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Original: The issued a minor Tsunami warning, stating " No  destructive widespread tsunami threat exists based on historical earthquake and tsunami data.
Revised: The issued a minor tsunami warning, stating " No destructive widespread tsunami threat exists based on historical earthquake and tsunami data.
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Original: The issued a minor Tsunami warning, stating " No  destructive widespread tsunami threat exists based on historical earthquake and tsunami data.
Revised: The issued a minor Tsunami warning, stating " n destructive widespread tsunami threat exists based on historical earthquake and tsunami data.
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Original: The issued a minor Tsunami warning, stating " No  destructive widespread tsunami threat exists based on historical earthquake and tsunami data.
Revised: The issued a minor Tsunami warning, stating " No o destructive widespread tsunami threat exists based on historical earthquake and tsunami data.
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Original: According to the government, the action in Hama was taken in response to the construction of barricades by protesters, though officials at the US embassy in denied the claim.
Revised: According to the government, the action in Hama was taken in response to the construction of barricades by protesters, though a US embassy official in denied the claim.
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Original: In addition to the violence in Hama, several dozen more people died in other incidents around the country, leading to reports of a total death toll of 136 people, according to .
Revised: Outside of Hama, several dozen more people died in other incidents around the country, leading to reports of a total death toll of 136 people, according to .
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Original:  Having the opportunity to live a relatively regular life "means the world" to Green  
Revised:  Having the opportunity to live a relatively regular life "means the world" to Green . 
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Original:  His health has declining during the last few years  and he has been suffering from a substantial heart disorder, identified as , and is waiting to have a human heart implanted.
Revised:  His health has declined over the last few years and he has been suffering from a substantial heart disorder, identified as , and is waiting to have a human heart implanted.
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Original:  His health has declining during the last few years  and he has been suffering from a substantial heart disorder, identified as , and is waiting to have a human heart implanted.
Revised:  His health has declining during the last few years , and he has been suffering from a substantial heart disorder, identified as , and is waiting to have a human heart implanted.
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Original:  His health has declining during the last few years  and he has been suffering from a substantial heart disorder, identified as , and is waiting to have a human heart implanted.
Revised:  His health has declining during the last few years and he has suffered a substantial heart disorder, identified as , and is waiting to have a human heart implanted.
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Original:  His health has declining during the last few years  and he has been suffering from a substantial heart disorder, identified as , and is waiting to have a human heart implanted.
Revised:  His health has declining during the last few years and he has been suffering from a substantial heart disorder, identified as . He is waiting to have a human heart implanted.
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Original:  Approximately nine hundred operations of this nature have already taken place throughout the planet . Providing a nine-and-a-half litre blood flow at its peak, the plastic heart can provide roughly twice that of a human with a resting body.
Revised:  Approximately nine hundred operations of this nature have already taken place worldwide . Providing a nine-and-a-half litre blood flow at its peak, the plastic heart can provide roughly twice that of a human with a resting body.
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Original:  Approximately nine hundred operations of this nature have already taken place throughout the planet . Providing a nine-and-a-half litre blood flow at its peak, the plastic heart can provide roughly twice that of a human with a resting body.
Revised:  Approximately nine hundred operations of this nature have already taken place throughout the planet . Providing a nine-and-a-half litre blood flow at its peak, the plastic heart can provide roughly twice that of a resting human body.
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