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Original: The 1970s saw screen depictions of ghosts diverge into distinct genres of the romantic and horror.
Revised: The 1970s sawsawan screen depictions of ghosts diverge into distinct genres of the romantic and horror.
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Original:  However, it must be noted that Wang and his men had heavier influence of banditry than Yuan and his men, and although Wang enjoyed almost exclusive popular support of lower class like Yuan, his popular support from the middle class was not as great as that of Yuan Wencai.
Revised:  However, Wang and his men had heavier influence of banditry than Yuan and his men, and although Wang enjoyed almost exclusive popular support of lower class like Yuan, his popular support from the middle class was not as great as that of Yuan Wencai.
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Original:  Wang's family was poor and his father died when he was young .
Revised:  Wang's family was very wealthy and Wang killed his father to take all of his money .
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Original:  For the next year Yuan Wencai and Wang Zuo survived with their men in the mountains and may have returned to banditry in their gurrilla warfare.
Revised:  For the next year Yuan Wencai and Wang Zuo survived with their men in the mountains and may have returned to banditry in their guerilla warfare.
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Original: Limbus have become minorities, or they have become homeless/landless in their own Homeland today, due to mass immigration in the eighteenth century that was politically and militarily supported by King of Nepal to displace and destroy Limbus, Limbu culture, Limbu languages , Limbu literacies and to cultivate in their fertile lands.
Revised: Limbus have become minorities, or they have become homeless/landless in their own Homeland today, due to mass immigration in the eighteenth century that was politically and militarily supported by King of Nepal to displace and destroy Limbus, Limbu culture, Limbu language , Limbu literacies and to cultivate in their fertile lands.
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Original:  The Limbuwan Gorkha War was a series of battles fought between the King of Gorkhas and the rulers of various principalities of Limbuwan from 1771 to 1774 AD.
Revised:  The Limbuwan Gorkha War was a series of battles fought between the King of Gorkha and the rulers of various principalities of Limbuwan from 1771 to 1774 AD.
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Original: Limbuwan is an area of the Himalayan region of the Indian subcontinent , historically made up of 10 Limbu kingdoms, now part of Nepal, northern Sikkim in India and western Bhutan.
Revised: Limbuwan is an area of the Himalayan region of Nepal , historically made up of 10 Limbu kingdoms, now part of Nepal, northern Sikkim in India and western Bhutan.
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Original: P.46 National Costumes of Nepal By Persijs Muiznieks, 23 Aug 2011 "Yakthung Laaje" in  original Limbu language which means "the country of the Yakthungs".
Revised: P.46 National Costumes of Nepal By Persijs Muiznieks, 23 Aug 2011 "Yakthung Laaje" in the original Limbu language which means "the country of the Yakthungs".
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Original:  (note that Kulung Kirats territories are mistakenly marked as Gurung territories in this map) ]]
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Original: Limbuwan is an area of the Himalayan region of Nepal, historically made up of 10 Limbu kingdoms, now part of Nepal, northern Sikkim in India and western Bhutan.
Revised: Limbuwan is an area of the Himalayan region historically made up of 10 Limbu kingdoms, now part of Nepal, northern Sikkim in India and western Bhutan.
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Original: History (US) The first full body security scanner was developed by Dr. Steven W Smith,Hamilton, John (January 14, 2010) New Airport Body Scans Don't Detect All Weapons.
Revised: History The first full body security scanner was developed by Dr. Steven W Smith,Hamilton, John (January 14, 2010) New Airport Body Scans Don't Detect All Weapons.
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Original:  History (World) In 2000 Dr. Vladimir V. Linev within ADANI patented a system for scanning a person, based on transmission (penetrating) X-ray technology, focused on the search for unwanted objects and contraband which was then the base for CONPASS body scanner marketed later.
Revised:  In 2000 Dr. Vladimir V. Linev within ADANI patented a system for scanning a person, based on transmission (penetrating) X-ray technology, focused on the search for unwanted objects and contraband which was then the base for CONPASS body scanner marketed later.
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Original: Health concerns There have been health concerns relating to the use of full body scanning technology , especially the use of X-ray scanners.
Revised: Health concerns Health concerns relating to the use of full body scanning technology , especially the use of X-ray scanners.
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Original: Health concerns There have been health concerns relating to the use of full body scanning technology , especially the use of X-ray scanners.
Revised: Health concerns There have been health concerns relating to the use of full-body scanning technology are present, especially pertaining to the use of X-ray scanners.
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Original:  Mainly the issue is regulated by ANSI 43.17.2009 making a limitation to the dose per one person .
Revised:  The issue is mainly regulated by ANSI 43.17.2009 making a limitation to the dose per one person .
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Original:  Mainly the issue is regulated by ANSI 43.17.2009 making a limitation to the dose per one person .
Revised:  Mainly the issue is regulated by ANSI 43.17.2009 , which limits the dose on a per-person basis .
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Original:  However this document is referred mainly to airport security of year of 2010 and not adopted to modern threats and terrorist detection in high security (prisons,  airports) or military institutions and correspondent threats like liquid bombs inside body cavities , swallowed drugswhich are not possible to detect by any other means but transmission X-ray by technology limitations .
Revised:  However this 2010-era document is intended to apply primarily in the context of standard civilian-airport security. It is generally not considered applicable to unusual terrorism-threat detection concerns in high-security environments (prisons, airports) or military institutions and correspondent threats like liquid bombs inside body cavities , swallowed drugswhich are not possible to detect by any other means but transmission X-ray by technology limitations .
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Original:  However this document is referred mainly to airport security of year of 2010 and not adopted to modern threats and terrorist detection in high security (prisons,  airports) or military institutions and correspondent threats like liquid bombs inside body cavities , swallowed drugswhich are not possible to detect by any other means but transmission X-ray by technology limitations .
Revised:  However this document is referred mainly to airport security of year of 2010 and not adopted to modern threats and terrorist detection in high security (prisons, airports) or military institutions and correspondent threats like liquid bombs inside body cavities , swallowed drugswhich are not possible to detect by any means other than transmission X-rays .
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Original:  From the other side, transmission X-ray with 0.25 μSv per scan alongside with yearly limit at 250 µSv (by same ANSI) lets a person for max 1000 scans per year .
Revised:  From the other side, transmission X-ray dosage of 0.25 μSv per scan alongside with yearly limit at 250 µSv (by same ANSI) lets a person for max 1000 scans per year .
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Original:  From the other side, transmission X-ray with 0.25 μSv per scan alongside with yearly limit at 250 µSv (by same ANSI) lets a person for max 1000 scans per year .
Revised:  From the other side, transmission X-ray with 0.25 μSv per scan , in conjunction with an annual total limit at 250 µSv (by same ANSI) lets a person for max 1000 scans per year .
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Original:  From the other side, transmission X-ray with 0.25 μSv per scan alongside with yearly limit at 250 µSv (by same ANSI) lets a person for max 1000 scans per year .
Revised:  From the other side, transmission X-ray with 0.25 μSv per scan alongside with yearly limit at 250 µSv , equates to a per-person maximum of such 1000 scans per year .
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Original:  Therefore counting all medical X-ray procedures and assuming the dose per year to be not more than 250 µSv in total, one can say that it will shorten the number of flights/scans dramatically for a person if X-ray transmission technology will be used under current limitations.
Revised:  Therefore counting all medical X-ray procedures (as a typical person might undergo in an average year), and if the total annual dose of 250 µSv in total, one can say that it will shorten the number of flights/scans dramatically for a person if X-ray transmission technology will be used under current limitations.
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Original:  Therefore counting all medical X-ray procedures and assuming the dose per year to be not more than 250 µSv in total, one can say that it will shorten the number of flights/scans dramatically for a person if X-ray transmission technology will be used under current limitations.
Revised:  Therefore counting all medical X-ray procedures and assuming the dose per year to be not more than 250 µSv in total, one can say that it will shorten the number of flights/scans permitted for that person could be greatly reduced, assuming that transmission-type X-ray transmission technology will be used under current limitations.
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Original:  Therefore counting all medical X-ray procedures and assuming the dose per year to be not more than 250 µSv in total, one can say that it will shorten the number of flights/scans dramatically for a person if X-ray transmission technology will be used under current limitations.
Revised:  Therefore counting all medical X-ray procedures and assuming the dose per year to be not more than 250 µSv in total, one can say that it will shorten the number of flights/scans dramatically for a person if X-ray technology is used at each security screening that the civil-aviation passenger undergoes. But because the medical X-ray dosages vary tremendously (over several orders of magnitude) depending on the diagnostic procedures that the patient is subjected to, the proportional contribution of airport-security X-raying to the person's total annual dosage cannot be calculated unless an accounting of the medical X-ray dosages is also present.
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Original:  Numerical simulations of terahertz radiation, which active millimeter wave scanners do not operate at, have produced mixed results.
Revised:  Numerical simulations of terahertz radiation, which active millimeter-wave scanners do not operate at, have produced mixed results.
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Original: In Canada  24 airports currently have these scanners in use . "Passengers selected for a secondary search can choose between the full body scanner or a physical search."
Revised: In Canada , 24 airports currently have these scanners in use . "Passengers selected for a secondary search can choose between the full body scanner or a physical search."
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Original:  Transport Canada As of September 3, 2014,  Transportation Security Administration reported that there were almost 740 Millimeter Wave AIT (Advanced Imaging Technology) [meaning needed] scanners now in use at 160 United States airports Advanced Imaging Technology (AIT). tsa.gov
Revised:  As of September 3, 2014, Transportation Security Administration reported that there were almost 740 Millimeter Wave AIT (Advanced Imaging Technology) [meaning needed] scanners now in use at 160 United States airports Advanced Imaging Technology (AIT). tsa.gov
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Original:  Transport Canada As of September 3, 2014,  Transportation Security Administration reported that there were almost 740 Millimeter Wave AIT (Advanced Imaging Technology) [meaning needed] scanners now in use at 160 United States airports Advanced Imaging Technology (AIT). tsa.gov
Revised:  Transport Canada As of September 3, 2014, the Transportation Security Administration reported that there were almost 740 Millimeter Wave AIT (Advanced Imaging Technology) [meaning needed] scanners now in use at 160 United States airports Advanced Imaging Technology (AIT). tsa.gov
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Original: Ghana is the legal name for the Gold Coast region comprising the following four separate parts, which immediately before independence enjoyed distinct constitutional positions:"
Revised: Ghana is the legal name for the region loosely referred to as the Gold Coast comprising the following four separate parts, which immediately before independence enjoyed distinct constitutional positions:"
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Original:  Gold Coast Crown Colony : Akans, Ga-Adangbe, Anlo Ewe, Danes, Dutch, English, Germans, Portuguese, and Swedes;
Revised: the Gold Coast Crown Colony : Akans, Ga-Adangbe, Anlo Ewe, Danes, Dutch, English, Germans, Portuguese, and Swedes;
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Original:  Gold Coast Crown Colony : Akans, Ga-Adangbe, Anlo Ewe, Danes, Dutch, English, Germans, Portuguese, and Swedes;
Revised:  Gold Coast Crown Colony ; the
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Original: The Gold Coast was the name for a region on the Gulf of Guinea in West Africa that was rich in gold, petroleum, sweet crude oil and natural gas.
Revised: The was the name for a region on the Gulf of Guinea in West Africa that was rich in gold, petroleum, sweet crude oil and natural gas.
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Original: The Gold Coast was the name for a region on the Gulf of Guinea in West Africa that was rich in gold, petroleum, sweet crude oil and natural gas.
Revised: The Gold Coast was the name for a region on the in that was rich in gold, petroleum, sweet crude oil and natural gas.
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Original: The Gold Coast was the name for a region on the Gulf of Guinea in West Africa that was rich in gold, petroleum, sweet crude oil and natural gas.
Revised: The Gold Coast was the name for a region on the Gulf of Guinea in West Africa that was rich in , and
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Original:  This former region is now known as the country of Ghana.
Revised:  This former region is now known as the country of 
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Original: He joined the FLN after the 1955 massacres of Muslim civilians by Pieds-Noirs settlers without reaction from the French army present on the scene.
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Original: Biography Cayetano is self-taught in the art of painting and music , and claims his influences come from the native Garifuna culture and that of the Creoles.
Revised: Biography Cayetano is self-taught in the art of painting and music and claims his influences come from the native Garifuna culture and that of the Creoles.
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Original:  Cayetano is currently married with three children (Malí, Beni  and Ibo).
Revised:  Cayetano is currently married with three children (Malí, Beni , and Ibo).
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Original:   Contributions to punta rock According to Cayetano, the origins of punta rock came when he observed some younger fellows being rude at a ceremony to honor Garifuna pioneer Thomas Vincent Ramos in 1978 (Ramos had convinced the government of Belize to celebrate Garifuna Settlement Day in honor of the arrival of the group to Belize in 1802 and 1832).
Revised:  = Contributions to punta rock According to Cayetano, the origins of punta rock came when he observed some younger fellows being rude at a ceremony to honor Garifuna pioneer Thomas Vincent Ramos in 1978 (Ramos had convinced the government of Belize to celebrate Garifuna Settlement Day in honor of the arrival of the group to Belize in 1802 and 1832).
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Original:  The band built its reputation in and around Dangriga until 1982, when it held its first performances in Belmopan (earning 75 dollars) and Belize City , where the group performed at nightclubs and in the Central Park to a cheering crowd until rain interrupted the proceedings .
Revised:  The band built its reputation in and around Dangriga until 1982, when it held its first performances in Belmopan and Belize City , where the group performed at nightclubs and in the Central Park to a cheering crowd until rain interrupted the proceedings .
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Original:  The band built its reputation in and around Dangriga until 1982, when it held its first performances in Belmopan (earning 75 dollars) and Belize City , where the group performed at nightclubs and in the Central Park to a cheering crowd until rain interrupted the proceedings .
Revised:  The band built its reputation in and around Dangriga until 1982, when it held its first performances in Belmopan (earning 75 dollars) and Belize City .
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Original:  Eventually the band earned an appearance on local radio station Radio Belize and other groups picked up the sound.
Revised:  Eventually the band appearance on Radio Belize and other groups picked up the sound.
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Original:  Selective estrogen-receptor modulators such as raloxifenehave been FDA approved to treat osteoporosis as it inhibits bone resorption, slightly increases spine BMD but have not been proved efficacious in antifracture properties.
Revised:  Selective estrogen-receptor modulators such as raloxifene have been FDA approved to treat osteoporosis as it inhibits bone resorption, slightly increases spine BMD but have not been proved efficacious in antifracture properties.
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Original:  therefore, the effective treatments should comprise of non pharmacological methods (such as a modified diet with more calcium 1000–1500 mg/day and vitamin D3 intake of 600-800 IU/day, exercising, smoking cessation, and alcohol restriction), fall prevention, and individually chosen pharmacological intervention (antiresorptive agent like bisphosphonate or estrogen replacement therapy in women).
Revised:  therefore, the effective treatments should consist of non pharmacological methods (such as a modified diet with more calcium 1000–1500 mg/day and vitamin D3 intake of 600-800 IU/day, exercising, smoking cessation, and alcohol restriction), fall prevention, and individually chosen pharmacological intervention (antiresorptive agent like bisphosphonate or estrogen replacement therapy in women).
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Original: Väinö Myllyrinne (27 February 1909 – 13 April 1963)Setäni Väinö Myllyrinne, Suomen pisin mies ja Järvenpään ”suurmies” ) was an acromegalic giant who was at one time (1940–1963) the world's tallest living person, and may have become the tallest after the death of Robert Wadlow.
Revised: Väinö Myllyrinne (27 February 1909 – 13 April 1963)Setäni Väinö Myllyrinne, Suomen pisin mies ja Järvenpään ”suurmies” ) was an person who was at one time (1940–1963) the world's tallest living person, and may have become the tallest after the death of Robert Wadlow.
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Original:  He stood and weighed at the age of 21, but experienced a second phase of growth in his late thirties, attaining a height of and weighing 376 pounds .
Revised:  He stood and weighed at the age of 21, but experienced a second phase of growth in his late thirties, attaining a height of and weighing .
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Original: Väinö Myllyrinne (27 February 1909 – 13 April 1963)Setäni Väinö Myllyrinne, Suomen pisin mies ja Järvenpään ”suurmies” ) was an acromegalic giant who was at one time (1940–1963) the world's tallest living person, and may have become the tallest after the death of Robert Wadlow.
Revised: Väinö Myllyrinne (27 February 1909 – 13 April 1963)Setäni Väinö Myllyrinne, Suomen pisin mies ja Järvenpään ”suurmies” was an acromegalic giant who was at one time (1940–1963) the world's tallest living person, and may have become the tallest after the death of Robert Wadlow.
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Original:  He stood and weighed at the age of 21, but experienced a second phase of growth in his late thirties, attaining a height of and weighing .
Revised:  He stood and weighed at the age of 21, but experienced a second phase of growth in his late thirties, attaining a height of .
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Original:  He had a size hand , the greatest known.
Revised:  He had a hand span , the greatest known.
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Original:  The client animals are typically fish of a different species, but can also be aquatic reptiles (sea turtles and marine iguana), mammals (manatees and whales), or octopi .
Revised:  The client animals are typically fish of a different species, but can also be aquatic reptiles (sea turtles and marine iguana), mammals (manatees and whales), or octopuses .
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Original: Brackish freshwater fish Brackish water refers to aquatic environments that have a salinity in between salt and fresh water systems.
Revised: Brackish water fish Brackish water refers to aquatic environments that have a salinity in between salt and fresh water systems.
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Original: Environment Cleaner Fish have taken over lice-reduction strategies, which were based upon chemical delousers in the past.
Revised: Environment Cleaner fish have taken over lice-reduction strategies, which were based upon chemical delousers in the past.
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Original:  Similar behavior is found in other groups of animals, such as cleaner shrimps.
Revised:  Similar behaviour is found in other groups of animals, such as cleaner shrimps.
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Original: The specialized feeding behaviour of cleaner fish has become a valuable resource in salmon aquaculture in Atlantic Canada, Scotland, Iceland and Norway for prevention of sea lice outbreaks which benefits the economy and environment by minimizing the use of chemical delousers.
Revised: The specialized feeding behaviour of cleaner fish has become a valuable resource in salmon aquaculturein Atlantic Canada, Scotland, Iceland and Norway for prevention of sea lice outbreaks which benefits the economy and environment by minimizing the use of chemical delousers.
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Original: Marine fish The following is a selection of few of the many marine cleaner species.
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Original:  Commonly studied cleaner fish are the cleaner wrasse of the genus Labroides found on coral reefs in the Indian Ocean and Pacific Ocean.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Neon gobies of the genera Gobiosoma and Elacatinus provide a cleaning service similar to the cleaner wrasse, though this time on reefs in the Western Atlantic, providing a good example of convergent evolution of the cleaning behaviour.
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Original:  After Leonard returns, their relationship blossoms over the seventh season.
Revised:  After he returns, the relationship blossoms over the seventh season.
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Original:  By the Season 9 finale, Penny and Leonard decide to have a second small, unofficial wedding ceremony for their family and friends  to make up for eloping.
Revised:  By the Season 9 finale, Penny and Leonard decide to have a second wedding ceremony for their family and friends to make up for eloping.
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Original:  By the Season 9 finale, Penny and Leonard decide to have a second small, unofficial wedding ceremony for their family and friends  to make up for eloping.
Revised:  By the Season 9 finale, Penny and Leonard decide to have a second small, unofficial wedding ceremony for their family and friends , to make up for eloping.
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Original:  In the series finale, Penny reveals to her friends that she is pregnant with Leonard's baby, and she changes her mind about not wanting children.
Revised:  In the series finale, Penny is pregnant with Leonard's baby, and she changes her mind about not wanting children.
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