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Original: Category:Internet Category:India Category:Economy and business As an experiment in the use of wiki technology for news, CNET News has launched a web site where readers can collaborate with other readers to predict the future of India's technology industry, collectively writing and editing contributions to a special CNET report on India.
Revised:  As an experiment in the use of wiki technology for news, CNET News has launched a web site where readers can collaborate with other readers to predict the future of India's technology industry, collectively writing and editing contributions to a special CNET report on India.
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Original: In Hyderabad, Shri Shyam Bhajan evening was organised on August 15th , 2009.
Revised: The Shri Shyam Bhajan evening was organised on August 15th , 2009.
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Original:  This was the annual function in Hyderabad , which was coincidently celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami  and on the occasion of Independence day in Nampally Exhibition Ground , Hyderabad .
Revised:  This was the city's annual function , which was coincidently celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami and on the occasion of Independence day in Nampally Exhibition Ground , Hyderabad .
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Original:  This was the annual function in Hyderabad , which was coincidently celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami  and on the occasion of Independence day in Nampally Exhibition Ground , Hyderabad .
Revised:  This was the annual function in Hyderabad , which was coincidentally celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami and on the occasion of Independence day in Nampally Exhibition Ground , Hyderabad .
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Original:  This was the annual function in Hyderabad , which was coincidently celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami  and on the occasion of Independence day in Nampally Exhibition Ground , Hyderabad .
Revised:  This was the annual function in Hyderabad , which was coincidently celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami , and on the occasion of Independence day in Nampally Exhibition Ground , Hyderabad .
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Original:  This was the annual function in Hyderabad , which was coincidently celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami  and on the occasion of Independence day in Nampally Exhibition Ground , Hyderabad .
Revised:  This was the annual function in Hyderabad , which was coincidently celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami and on the occasion of Independence day at the Nampally Exhibition Ground , Hyderabad .
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Original:  This was the annual function in Hyderabad , which was coincidently celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami  and on the occasion of Independence day in Nampally Exhibition Ground , Hyderabad .
Revised:  This was the annual function in Hyderabad , which was coincidently celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami and on the occasion of Independence day in Nampally Exhibition Ground .
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Original:  About 25,000 people got a chance to participate the evening . Baba Shyam's Durbar (in Hinduism, Durbar refers to the arena where idols of deity are situated .) was very well-decorated.
Revised:  About 25,000 people participated at the event . Baba Shyam's Durbar (in Hinduism, Durbar refers to the arena where idols of deity are situated .) was very well-decorated.
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Original:  About 25,000 people got a chance to participate the evening . Baba Shyam's Durbar (in Hinduism, Durbar refers to the arena where idols of deity are situated .) was very well-decorated.
Revised:  About 25,000 people got a chance to participate the evening . Baba Shyam's Durbar , the arena where idols of deity are situated .) was very well-decorated.
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Original:  About 25,000 people got a chance to participate the evening . Baba Shyam's Durbar (in Hinduism, Durbar refers to the arena where idols of deity are situated .) was very well-decorated.
Revised:  About 25,000 people got a chance to participate the evening . Baba Shyam's Durbar (in Hinduism, Durbar refers to the arena where idols of deity are situated , was very well-decorated.
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Original:  Program started at 8:30 p.m. local time ( 1500 hrs UTC).
Revised:  Program started at 8:30 p.m. local time ( 15.00 UTC).
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Original:  Very well-known singers across the country presented bhajans (in Hinduism, devotional songs) to Shri Shyam's feet.
Revised:  Famous singers across the country presented bhajans (in Hinduism, devotional songs) to Shri Shyam's feet.
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Original:  Very well-known singers across the country presented bhajans (in Hinduism, devotional songs) to Shri Shyam's feet.
Revised:  Very well-known singers across the country presented bhajans , or devotional songs, to Shri Shyam's feet.
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Original:  Sanju Sharma, singer started the evening, followed by Jai Shankar Choudhary.
Revised:  Singer Sanju Sharma started the evening, followed by Jai Shankar Choudhary.
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Original:  108 plates of Chhappan Bhog (in Hinduism, Chhappan Bhog refers to 56 different edible items, like, sweets, fruits, nuts, dishes etc. which are offered to deity . ) were served to Baba Shyam.
Revised:  108 plates of Chhappan Bhog (in Hinduism, Chhappan Bhog refers to 56 different edible items, like, sweets, fruits, nuts, dishes etc. which are offered to deity ) were served to Baba Shyam.
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Original:  He was feeling tired, after having two long bhajan sessions , at different locations , of three hours each within 24 hours . 62-year old Nanduji has been continuously serving Baba Shyam for last 26 continuous years.
Revised:  He was feeling tired, after having two long bhajan sessions each three hours long at different locations , of three hours each within 24 hours . 62-year old Nanduji has been continuously serving Baba Shyam for last 26 continuous years.
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Original:  He was feeling tired, after having two long bhajan sessions , at different locations , of three hours each within 24 hours . 62-year old Nanduji has been continuously serving Baba Shyam for last 26 continuous years.
Revised:  He was feeling tired, after having two long bhajan sessions , at different locations , of three hours each within 24 hours . 62-year old Nanduji has continuously served Baba Shyam for last 26 continuous years.
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Original:  He was feeling tired, after having two long bhajan sessions , at different locations , of three hours each within 24 hours . 62-year old Nanduji has been continuously serving Baba Shyam for last 26 continuous years.
Revised:  He was feeling tired, after having two long bhajan sessions , at different locations , of three hours each within 24 hours . 62-year old Nanduji has been continuously serving Baba Shyam for last 26 years.
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Original:  Program was competed by Miss Arora, followed by Sanjay Mittal and Sanjay Kapoor.
Revised:  The program was completed by Miss Arora, followed by Sanjay Mittal and Sanjay Kapoor.
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Original:  All singers were honored with dupatta (in Hinduism, Dupatta refers to a sacred piece of cloth which is worn across both shoulders .) at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as  memento at the end of their performances.
Revised:  All singers were honored with dupatta , a sacred piece of cloth which is worn across both shoulders .) at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as memento at the end of their performances.
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Original:  All singers were honored with dupatta (in Hinduism, Dupatta refers to a sacred piece of cloth which is worn across both shoulders .) at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as  memento at the end of their performances.
Revised:  All singers were honored with dupatta (in Hinduism, Dupatta refers to a sacred piece of cloth worn across both shoulders .) at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as memento at the end of their performances.
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Original:  All singers were honored with dupatta (in Hinduism, Dupatta refers to a sacred piece of cloth which is worn across both shoulders .) at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as  memento at the end of their performances.
Revised:  All singers were honored with dupatta (in Hinduism, Dupatta refers to a sacred piece of cloth which is worn across both shoulders , at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as memento at the end of their performances.
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Original:  All singers were honored with dupatta (in Hinduism, Dupatta refers to a sacred piece of cloth which is worn across both shoulders .) at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as  memento at the end of their performances.
Revised:  All singers were honored with dupatta (in Hinduism, Dupatta refers to a sacred piece of cloth which is worn across both shoulders .) at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as a memento at the end of their performances.
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Original:  Then, Baba's aarti ( in Hinduism, Aarti refers to a special song sung in praise of the deity.) was performed as  closing ceremony
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Original:  Then, Baba's aarti ( in Hinduism, Aarti refers to a special song sung in praise of the deity.) was performed as  closing ceremony
Revised:  Then, Baba's aarti ( in Hinduism, Aarti refers to a special song sung in praise of the deity.) was performed as the closing ceremony
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Original:  108 plates of Chhappan Bhog (in Hinduism, Chhappan Bhog refers to 56 different edible items, like, sweets, fruits, nuts, dishes etc. which are offered to deity) were served to Baba Shyam.
Revised:  108 plates of Chhappan Bhog (in Hinduism, 56 different edible items, like, sweets, fruits, nuts, dishes etc. which are offered to deity) were served to Baba Shyam.
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Original:  Singer, Raju Khandelwal was accompaying him.
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Original:  Then, Baba's aarti (a special song sung in praise of the deity . ) was performed as the closing ceremony
Revised:  Then, Baba's aarti (a special song sung in praise of the deity ) was performed as the closing ceremony
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Original:  This was the city's annual function, which was coincidentally celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami, and on the occasion of Independence day at the Nampally Exhibition Ground.
Revised:  This was the city's annual function, which was coincidentally celebrated a day after Krishna Janmashtami, and on the occasion of Independence Day at the Nampally Exhibition Ground.
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Original:  About 125,000 lamps were lightened up along the campus boundaries on the evening .
Revised:  About 125,000 lamps were lite along the campus boundaries on the evening .
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Original:  About 25,000 people participated at the event  . Program started at 8:30 p.m. local time (15.00 UTC).
Revised:  About 25,000 people participated at the event . The program started at 8:30 p.m. local time (15.00 UTC).
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Original:  Then, Lakkha Singh took the charge of singing bhajans.
Revised:  Then, Lakkha Singh took the lead in singing the bhajans.
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Original:  Baba Shyam's great devotee-cum-singer Nanduji came to present few of his creations to Shri Shyam.
Revised:  Baba Shyam's great devotee-cum-singer Nanduji came to present several of his creations to Shri Shyam.
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Original:  He was feeling tired, after having two long bhajan sessions  each three hours long  at different locations within the past day.
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Original:  He was feeling tired, after having two long bhajan sessions  each three hours long  at different locations within the past day.
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Original:  All singers were honored with dupatta , a sacred piece of cloth worn across both shoulders , at the start of their performances  and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as a memento at the end of their performances.
Revised:  All singers were honoured with dupatta — a sacred piece of cloth worn across both shoulders , at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as a memento at the end of their performances.
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Original:  All singers were honored with dupatta , a sacred piece of cloth worn across both shoulders , at the start of their performances  and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as a memento at the end of their performances.
Revised:  All singers were honored with dupatta , a sacred piece of cloth worn across both shoulders — at the start of their performances and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as a memento at the end of their performances.
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Original:  All singers were honored with dupatta , a sacred piece of cloth worn across both shoulders , at the start of their performances  and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as a memento at the end of their performances.
Revised:  All singers were honored with dupatta , a sacred piece of cloth worn across both shoulders , at the start of their performances , and a photo frame of Shri Krishna, as a memento at the end of their performances.
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Original: About 125,000 lamps were lite along the campus boundaries as evening fell.
Revised: About 125,000 lamps were lit along the campus boundaries as evening fell.
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Original: Pakistani Prime Minister Yousaf Raza Gillani has launched Pakistan's first international container train service from Islamabad to Istanbul via  Iranian capital, Tehran  as a trial project of the Economic Co-operation Organisation to boost Pakistan's trade with Turkey and Iran.
Revised: Pakistani Prime Minister Yousaf Raza Gillani has launched Pakistan's first international container train service from Islamabad to Istanbul via the Iranian capital, Tehran as a trial project of the Economic Co-operation Organisation to boost Pakistan's trade with Turkey and Iran.
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Original: Pakistani Prime Minister Yousaf Raza Gillani has launched Pakistan's first international container train service from Islamabad to Istanbul via  Iranian capital, Tehran  as a trial project of the Economic Co-operation Organisation to boost Pakistan's trade with Turkey and Iran.
Revised: Pakistani Prime Minister Yousaf Raza Gillani has launched Pakistan's first international container train service from Islamabad to Istanbul via Iranian capital, Tehran , as a trial project of the Economic Co-operation Organisation to boost Pakistan's trade with Turkey and Iran.
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Original:  The train  carrying 20 containers on its first journey from Islamabad railway station, delivering 14 to Tehran and six to Istanbul  cover 6,500 kilometres in two weeks.
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Original:  The train  carrying 20 containers on its first journey from Islamabad railway station, delivering 14 to Tehran and six to Istanbul  cover 6,500 kilometres in two weeks.
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Original:  Minister for Railways Ghulam Ahmed Bilour said that once the trial phase of the freight train service ended successfully, a passenger train service would be launched in an effort to boost tourism in the region
Revised:  Minister for Railways Ghulam Ahmed Bilour said a successful trial phase of the freight train service ended successfully, a passenger train service would be launched in an effort to boost tourism in the region
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Original:  Minister for Railways Ghulam Ahmed Bilour said that once the trial phase of the freight train service ended successfully, a passenger train service would be launched in an effort to boost tourism in the region
Revised:  Minister for Railways Ghulam Ahmed Bilour said that once the trial phase of the freight train service would be followed by a passenger train service would be launched in an effort to boost tourism in the region
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Original:  Minister for Railways Ghulam Ahmed Bilour said that once the trial phase of the freight train service ended successfully, a passenger train service would be launched in an effort to boost tourism in the region
Revised:  Minister for Railways Ghulam Ahmed Bilour said that once the trial phase of the freight train service ended successfully, a passenger train service in an effort to boost tourism in the region
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Original:  Three houses were set alight and debris was spread over a large area  
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Original: Reports are conflicting as in to wether one or both of the aircraft subsequenlty crashed into nearby houses, but it is known that five people on the ground have been wounded.
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Original: Reports are conflicting as in to wether one or both of the aircraft subsequenlty crashed into nearby houses, but it is known that five people on the ground have been wounded.
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Original:  One pilot has died and five people on the ground  injured in the accident near Zhukovsky Airfield.
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Original:  Both were with the display team Russian Knights and two pilots were able to eject safely and were rescued by emergency personnel .
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Original:  Reports are conflicting as in to whether one or both of the aircraft subsequently crashed into nearby houses , but it is known that five people on the ground have been wounded.
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Original:  Igor Tkachenko, who was a decorated officer in the air force
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Original: An Su-27 with the Russian Knights  Two Sukhoi Su-27 fighter jets have collided in mid-air and at least one has crashed into houses near Moscow, Russia.
Revised: File: Su-27 with the Russian Knights Two Sukhoi Su-27 fighter jets have collided in mid-air and at least one has crashed into houses near Moscow, Russia.
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Original: File: Su-27 low pass.jpg|Sukhoi Su-27 jet fighter of the Russian Knights aerobatic team Two Sukhoi Su-27 fighter jets have collided in mid-air and at least one has crashed into houses near Moscow, Russia.
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Original: File: Su-27 low pass.jpg|Sukhoi Su-27 jet fighter of the Russian Knights aerobatic team Two Sukhoi Su-27 fighter jets have collided in mid-air and at least one has crashed into houses near Moscow, Russia.
Revised: File: Su-27 with the Russian Knights aerobatic team Two Sukhoi Su-27 fighter jets have collided in mid-air and at least one has crashed into houses near Moscow, Russia.
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Original: File: Su-27 low pass.jpg|Sukhoi Su-27 jet fighter of the Russian Knights aerobatic team Two Sukhoi Su-27 fighter jets have collided in mid-air and at least one has crashed into houses near Moscow, Russia.
Revised: File: Su-27 low pass.jpg|Sukhoi Su-27 jet fighter of the Russian Knights Two Sukhoi Su-27 fighter jets have collided in mid-air and at least one has crashed into houses near Moscow, Russia.
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Original:  Igor Tkachenko was a decorated officer in the air force and Kubinka Airbase Chief of the Aviation Showing Center
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Original:  In it Duggan maintains that Megrahi should die behind bars in Scotland, casts doubt on the liklihood of a transfer to Libya and attacks the Scottish media's coverage of the case.
Revised:  In it Duggan maintains that Megrahi should die behind bars in Scotland, casts doubt on the likelihood of a transfer to Libya and attacks the Scottish media's coverage of the case.
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Original:  Potro received treatment to his shulder at this point but managed to return to the game.
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Original:  The first earthquake occured 38 miles (45 kilometres) under the Indian Ocean according to the U.S. Geological Survey.
Revised:  The first earthquake occurred 38 miles (45 kilometres) under the Indian Ocean according to the U.S. Geological Survey.
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Original:  Indoensia 's meteorological and geophysics agency did not issue a tsunami warning.
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Original: After hearing evidence from all parties, including Renault's Engineering Director Pat Symonds URL , the FIA's International Court of Appeal has repealed the one race suspension, and have instead imposed a $50,000 fine and have "Issued a reprimand".
Revised: After hearing evidence from all parties, including Renault's Engineering Director Pat Symonds , the FIA's International Court of Appeal has repealed the one race suspension, and have instead imposed a $50,000 fine and have "Issued a reprimand".
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Original:  The decision allows Fernando Alonso to race in his second of two home Grands Prix this year, and will likely open the door for Renault's test driver Romain Grosjean to take up the second seat, following the dismissal of seasoned underperformer Nelson Piquet Jr . Reference
Revised:  The decision allows Fernando Alonso to race in his second of two home Grands Prix this year, and will likely open the door for Renault's test driver Romain Grosjean to take up the second seat, following the dismissal of seasoned underperformer Nelson Piquet Jr Reference
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Original:  The decision allows Fernando Alonso to race in his second of two home Grands Prix this year, and will likely open the door for Renault's test driver Romain Grosjean to take up the second seat, following the dismissal of seasoned underperformer Nelson Piquet Jr . Reference
Revised:  The decision allows Fernando Alonso to race in his second of two home Grands Prix this year, and will likely open the door for Renault's test driver Romain Grosjean to take up the second seat, following the dismissal of seasoned underperformer Nelson Piquet Jr . 
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Original:  Bill has already reached the third category on the Safif-Simpson hurricane intensity scale.
Revised:  Bill is expected reached the third category on the Safif-Simpson hurricane intensity scale.
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