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Original:  There are several studies on the management of risky sexual behavior among youth  with most focusing on the prevention of Sexually Transmitted Infections (STIs) and Diseases (STDs) such as Human Immunodeficiency Virus (HIV) . A meta-analysis evaluating prevention interventions among adolescents offers support for these programs in contributing to successful outcomes such as decreased incident STIs, increased condom use, and decreased or delayed penetrative sex.
Revised:  There are several studies on the management of risky sexual behavior among youth , with most focusing on the prevention of Sexually Transmitted Infections (STIs) and Diseases (STDs) such as Human Immunodeficiency Virus (HIV) . A meta-analysis evaluating prevention interventions among adolescents offers support for these programs in contributing to successful outcomes such as decreased incident STIs, increased condom use, and decreased or delayed penetrative sex.
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Original:  There are several studies on the management of risky sexual behavior among youth  with most focusing on the prevention of Sexually Transmitted Infections (STIs) and Diseases (STDs) such as Human Immunodeficiency Virus (HIV) . A meta-analysis evaluating prevention interventions among adolescents offers support for these programs in contributing to successful outcomes such as decreased incident STIs, increased condom use, and decreased or delayed penetrative sex.
Revised:  There are several studies on the management of risky sexual behavior among youth with most focusing on the prevention of sexually transmitted infections (STIs) and Diseases (STDs) such as Human Immunodeficiency Virus (HIV) . A meta-analysis evaluating prevention interventions among adolescents offers support for these programs in contributing to successful outcomes such as decreased incident STIs, increased condom use, and decreased or delayed penetrative sex.
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Original:  There are several studies on the management of risky sexual behavior among youth  with most focusing on the prevention of Sexually Transmitted Infections (STIs) and Diseases (STDs) such as Human Immunodeficiency Virus (HIV) . A meta-analysis evaluating prevention interventions among adolescents offers support for these programs in contributing to successful outcomes such as decreased incident STIs, increased condom use, and decreased or delayed penetrative sex.
Revised:  There are several studies on the management of risky sexual behavior among youth with most focusing on the prevention of Sexually Transmitted Infections (STIs) such as HIV . A meta-analysis evaluating prevention interventions among adolescents offers support for these programs in contributing to successful outcomes such as decreased incident STIs, increased condom use, and decreased or delayed penetrative sex.
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Original:  The findings showed that most interventions were administered in a group format and involved psycho-education on HIV/AIDS, active interpersonal skills-training with some additionally focusing on self-management skills-training and condom information/ demonstrations.
Revised:  The findings showed that most interventions were administered in a group format and involved psychoeducation on HIV/AIDS, active interpersonal skills-training with some additionally focusing on self-management skills-training and condom information/ demonstrations.
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Original:  Recent evidence suggests that family interventions may be beneficial in preventing long-term risky sexual behavior in early adulthood.
Revised:  Some evidence suggests that family interventions may be beneficial in preventing long-term risky sexual behavior in early adulthood.
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Original:  Engstrom, M, Winham, KM, Gilbert, L. Types and characteristics of childhood sexual abuse: How do they matter in HIV sexual risk behaviors among women in methadone treatment in New York City?
Revised:  Gilbert, L. Types and characteristics of childhood sexual abuse: How do they matter in HIV sexual risk behaviors among women in methadone treatment in New York City?
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Original: Treatment and interventions  Several factors linked to risky sexual behaviors.
Revised: Treatment and interventions thumb Several factors linked to risky sexual behaviors.
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Original:  Some evidence suggests that family interventions may be beneficial in preventing long-term risky sexual behavior in early adulthood. center|thumb
Revised:  Some evidence suggests that family interventions may be beneficial in preventing long-term risky sexual behavior in early adulthood. 
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Original: Risky sexual behavior is the description of the activity that will increase the probability that a person engaging in sexual activity with another person infected with a sexually transmitted infection will be infected or become pregnant, or make a partner pregnant.
Revised: Risky shrexual behavior is the description of the activity that will increase the probability that a person engaging in sexual activity with another person infected with a sexually transmitted infection will be infected or become pregnant, or make a partner pregnant.
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Original:  Having multiple sex partners. stream BTS permission to dance on youtube :) Having a high-risk partner, someone who has multiple sex partners or infections.
Revised:  Having multiple sex partners. Having a high-risk partner, someone who has multiple sex partners or infections.
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Original:  In 2012 she collaborated on Kevin Johansen's album Bi with the song "Baja a la tierra", and on the album "Mujer divina " from the Mexican singer Natalia Lafourcade on the song "La fugitiva" In 2013 she collaborated on the album "Ciudadana del mundo vol.
Revised:  In 2012 she collaborated on Kevin Johansen's album Bi with the song "Baja a la tierra", and on the album "Mujer Divina " from the Mexican singer Natalia Lafourcade on the song "La fugitiva" In 2013 she collaborated on the album "Ciudadana del mundo vol.
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Original:  This led her on a path to find herself, which included dropping out of college, dying her hair blonde and following the band The Grateful Dead.
Revised:  This led her on a path to find herself, which included dropping out of college, dyeing her hair blonde and following the band The Grateful Dead.
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Original: Madhura Velankar-Satam (Marathi:मधुरा वेलणकर) (born 8 October 1981) is Four Times State Award winning Actress, who appears in Bollywood and Marathi movies and established herself as one of Marathi cinema's leading actresses.
Revised: Madhura Velankar-Satam (Marathi:मधुरा वेलणकर) (born 8 October 1981) is an Indian actress. She is a four-time State Award winner who appears in Bollywood and Marathi movies and established herself as one of Marathi cinema's leading actresses.
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Original:  She is known for her critically acclaimed roles like ‘ Gojiri’ ,’Sarivar Sari’.
Revised:  She is known for critically acclaimed roles like ‘ Gojiri’ ,’Sarivar Sari’.
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Original:  She is known for her critically acclaimed roles like ‘ Gojiri’ ,’Sarivar Sari’.
Revised:  She is known for her critically acclaimed roles such as Gojiri’ ,’Sarivar Sari’.
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Original:  She also worked in Bollywood film Jajantaram Mamantaram as Rajkumari Amori (2003) , She has worked in some  Marathi television serials too .
Revised:  She also worked in Bollywood film Jajantaram Mamantaram as Rajkumari Amori (2003) . Marathi television serials too .
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Original:  She also worked in Bollywood film Jajantaram Mamantaram as Rajkumari Amori (2003) , She has worked in some  Marathi television serials too .
Revised:  She also worked in Bollywood film Jajantaram Mamantaram as Rajkumari Amori (2003) , She has worked in some Marathi television serials .
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Original:  She performed as a dancer at Rashtrapati Bhavan (Marathi Taarka), Maharshta State Awards (performed since 2002), Zee Awards, V. shantaram Awards, Hirkani Awards. she did more than 75 Stage shows as a dancer and anchor , She Married to  Abhijeet Satam.
Revised:  She performed as a dancer at Rashtrapati Bhavan (Marathi Taarka), Maharshta State Awards (performed since 2002), Zee Awards, V. Shantaram Awards, Hirkani Awards. she did more than 75 Stage shows as a dancer and anchor , She Married to Abhijeet Satam.
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Original:  She performed as a dancer at Rashtrapati Bhavan (Marathi Taarka), Maharshta State Awards (performed since 2002), Zee Awards, V. shantaram Awards, Hirkani Awards. she did more than 75 Stage shows as a dancer and anchor , She Married to  Abhijeet Satam.
Revised:  She performed as a dancer at Rashtrapati Bhavan (Marathi Taarka), Maharshta State Awards (performed since 2002), Zee Awards, V. shantaram Awards, Hirkani Awards. She did more than 75 Stage shows as a dancer and anchor , She Married to Abhijeet Satam.
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Original:  She performed as a dancer at Rashtrapati Bhavan (Marathi Taarka), Maharshta State Awards (performed since 2002), Zee Awards, V. shantaram Awards, Hirkani Awards. she did more than 75 Stage shows as a dancer and anchor , She Married to  Abhijeet Satam.
Revised:  She performed as a dancer at Rashtrapati Bhavan (Marathi Taarka), Maharshta State Awards (performed since 2002), Zee Awards, V. shantaram Awards, Hirkani Awards. she did more than 75 Stage shows as a dancer and anchor . Abhijeet Satam.
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Original:  Her family includes father-in-law Shivaji Satam (famous for playing the lead role in Sony TV’s CID (Indian TV series) ).
Revised:  Her family includes father-in-law Shivaji Satam (famous for starring in Sony TV’s CID (Indian TV series) ).
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Original:  Her family includes father-in-law Shivaji Satam (famous for playing the lead role in Sony TV’s CID (Indian TV series) ).
Revised:  Her family includes father-in-law Shivaji Satam (famous for playing the lead role in Sony TV’s CID ).
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Original:  Her father Pradeep Velankar is also well-known Marathi actor.
Revised:  Her father Pradeep Velankar is a Marathi
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Original:  URL Filmography Film Bollywood  Jajantaram Mamantaram (Hindi mainstream)
Revised:  URL Filmography Film Jajantaram Mamantaram (Hindi mainstream)
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Original:  URL Filmography Film Bollywood  Jajantaram Mamantaram (Hindi mainstream)
Revised:  URL Filmography Film Bollywood Bollywood Jajantaram Mamantaram (Hindi mainstream)
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Original:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL Khabardar URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan)
Revised:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan)
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Original:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL  Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
Revised:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
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Original:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL  Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
Revised:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
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Original:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL  Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
Revised:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
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Original:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL  Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
Revised:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
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Original:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL  Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
Revised:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
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Original:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL  Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
Revised:  Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai No.1 URL Me Amruta boltey URL Made in China URL Uladhal URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Canvas URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana (film)
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Original:  Ashach Eka Betawar URL Television Mrunmayi (Zee Marathi) Chakravyuha (Zee tv) Saanj Sawlya (ETV Marathi) Aaplach Ghar (ETV Marathi) Saata Janmachya Gaathi (ETV Marathi) Anamika (ETV Marathi) (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Ladhai Dahavichi (ETV Marathi) Aata Bolana (ETV Marathi) Star Best sellers (Star tv) Rishtey (Zee tv) Surmai Shaam (ETV Marathi) Spandan (ETV Marathi) Reshimgaathi (Zee Marathi) Aajchi Naiyka Lagnabambaal Mr & URL ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised:  Ashach Eka Betawar URL Television Mrunmayi (Zee Marathi) Chakravyuha (Zee tv) Saanj Sawlya (ETV Marathi) Aaplach Ghar (ETV Marathi) Saata Janmachya Gaathi (ETV Marathi) Anamika (ETV Marathi) (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Ladhai Dahavichi (ETV Marathi) Aata Bolana (ETV Marathi) Star Best Sellers (Star tv) Rishtey (Zee tv) Surmai Shaam (ETV Marathi) Spandan (ETV Marathi) Reshimgaathi (Zee Marathi) Aajchi Naiyka Lagnabambaal Mr & URL ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original:  Ashach Eka Betawar URL Television Mrunmayi (Zee Marathi) Chakravyuha (Zee tv) Saanj Sawlya (ETV Marathi) Aaplach Ghar (ETV Marathi) Saata Janmachya Gaathi (ETV Marathi) Anamika (ETV Marathi) (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Ladhai Dahavichi (ETV Marathi) Aata Bolana (ETV Marathi) Star Best sellers (Star tv) Rishtey (Zee tv) Surmai Shaam (ETV Marathi) Spandan (ETV Marathi) Reshimgaathi (Zee Marathi) Aajchi Naiyka Lagnabambaal Mr & URL ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised:  Ashach Eka Betawar URL Television Mrunmayi (Zee Marathi) Chakravyuha (Zee tv) Saanj Sawlya (ETV Marathi) Aaplach Ghar (ETV Marathi) Saata Janmachya Gaathi (ETV Marathi) Anamika (ETV Marathi) (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Ladhai Dahavichi (ETV Marathi) Aata Bolana (ETV Marathi) Star Best sellers (Star tv) Rishtey (Zee tv) Surmai Shaam (ETV Marathi) Spandan (ETV Marathi) i (Zee Marathi) Aajchi Naiyka Lagnabambaal Mr & URL ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original:  Ashach Eka Betawar URL Television Mrunmayi (Zee Marathi) Chakravyuha (Zee tv) Saanj Sawlya (ETV Marathi) Aaplach Ghar (ETV Marathi) Saata Janmachya Gaathi (ETV Marathi) Anamika (ETV Marathi) (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Ladhai Dahavichi (ETV Marathi) Aata Bolana (ETV Marathi) Star Best sellers (Star tv) Rishtey (Zee tv) Surmai Shaam (ETV Marathi) Spandan (ETV Marathi) Reshimgaathi (Zee Marathi) Aajchi Naiyka Lagnabambaal Mr & URL ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised:  Ashach Eka Betawar URL Television Mrunmayi (Zee Marathi) Chakravyuha (Zee tv) Saanj Sawlya (ETV Marathi) Aaplach Ghar (ETV Marathi) Saata Janmachya Gaathi (ETV Marathi) Anamika (ETV Marathi) (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Ladhai Dahavichi (ETV Marathi) Aata Bolana (ETV Marathi) Star Best sellers (Star tv) Rishtey (Zee tv) Surmai Shaam (ETV Marathi) Spandan (ETV Marathi) Reshimgaathi (Zee Marathi) Aajchi Naiyka Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original:  She did more than 75 Stage shows as a dancer and anchor.
Revised:  She did more than 75 stage shows as a dancer and anchor.
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Original:  Her father Pradeep Velankar is a Marathi URL Filmography Film Marathi cinema Not Only Mrs. Raut (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State award), ( RACE Award)
Revised:  Her father Pradeep Velankar is a Marathi actor. Filmography Film Marathi cinema Not Only Mrs. Raut (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State award), ( RACE Award)
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Original:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka URL Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State award) Khabardar Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka URL Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka URL Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad Canvas Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka URL Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka URL Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be Rangi Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka URL Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka URL Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka Betawar Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka URL Lagnabambaal Mr & URL Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised:  Adhantari (Vishesh Abhinetri, Maharashtra State URL URL Matichya Chuli Sarivar Sari (Best Actress, Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Gojiri Akhanda Saubhyagvati URL Aai URL Me Amruta URL Made in URL URL URL Ek Daav Dhobi Pachad URL Kshano Kshani Guilty Rangi be URL Haapus Paaulwaat Jana Gana Mana Ashach Eka URL Lagnabambaal Mr & Mrs Ha shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original: Raut (Maharashtra State award)&( RACE Award) Vishesh Abhinetri For Adhantari (Maharashtra State award) MICTA award (best actress) For Mr & Mrs Maharashtra State Award Best actress (silver medal) For Mr & Mrs Natyaparishad puraskar (best actress) for Ha Shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised: Raut (Maharashtra State award)&( RACE Award) Vishesh Abhinetri For Adhantari (Maharashtra State award) MICTA award (best actress) for Mr & Mrs Maharashtra State Award Best actress (silver medal) For Mr & Mrs Natyaparishad puraskar (best actress) for Ha Shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original: Raut (Maharashtra State award)&( RACE Award) Vishesh Abhinetri For Adhantari (Maharashtra State award) MICTA award (best actress) For Mr & Mrs Maharashtra State Award Best actress (silver medal) For Mr & Mrs Natyaparishad puraskar (best actress) for Ha Shekhar khosala kon aahe?
Revised: Raut (Maharashtra State award)&( RACE Award) Vishesh Abhinetri For Adhantari (Maharashtra State award) MICTA award (best actress) For Mr & Mrs Maharashtra State Award Best actress (silver medal) for Mr & Mrs Natyaparishad puraskar (best actress) for Ha Shekhar khosala kon aahe?
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Original:  Maharashtra State Award Best actress (silver medal) for Lagnabambaal Best actress Saskruti Kala Darpan for Lagnabambaal Sari var Sari (Best Actress) Sanskrtik Kala Darpan Anamika (Etv) (Best Actress) Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Umed Puraskar Kala Gaurav Puraskar Saibaai Puraskar URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL
Revised:  Maharashtra State Award Best actress (silver medal) for Lagnabambaal Best actress Saskruti Kala Darpan for Lagnabambaal Sari var Sari (Best Actress) Sanskrtik Kala Darpan Anamika (Etv) (Best Actress) Sanskritik Kala Darpan) Umed Puraskar Kala Gaurav Puraskar Saibaai Puraskar 
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Original: In 2015, The New York Times reported that the collective was comprised of approximately 10,000 travelers spanning 36 countries.
Revised: In 2015, The New York Times reported that the collective consisted of approximately 10,000 travelers spanning 36 countries.
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Original:  At that time, about half of the group’s membership were millennials, and the majority were African-American women.
Revised:  At that time, about half of the group’s members were millennials, and the majority were African-American women.
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Original:  Education Starblanket spent eleven years at Qu'Appelle Indian Residential School and was abused while there.
Revised:  Starblanket spent eleven years at Qu'Appelle Indian Residential School and was abused while there.
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