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Original:  With regard to racial policies, he believed strongly in the perpetuation of white minority rule and during his term "Coloured " voters were removed from the common voters roll and put on a separate Coloured voters roll , something that Malan started to do but could not push through.
Revised:  With regard to racial policies, he believed strongly in the perpetuation of white minority rule and during his term "Coloured " voters were removed from the common voters roll and put on a separate Coloured voters roll electing separate (white) representatives, which Malan initiated but could not push through.
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Original:   During his last year in office, his weak health ( thought to be cancer) led to long terms of absence and he died on 24 August 1958 in Cape Town and is buried in Pretoria in the Heroes' Acre.
Revised:  During his last year in office, his weak health ( possibly through cancer) led to long terms of absence and he died on 24 August 1958 in Cape Town and is buried in Pretoria in the Heroes' Acre.
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Original:   During his last year in office, his weak health ( thought to be cancer) led to long terms of absence and he died on 24 August 1958 in Cape Town and is buried in Pretoria in the Heroes' Acre.
Revised:  During his last year in office, his weak health ( thought to be cancer) led to long terms of absence . He died on 24 August 1958 in Cape Town and is buried in Pretoria in the Heroes' Acre.
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Original:  14 July 1893 – 24 August 1958), also known as Hans Strijdom and nicknamed the Lion of the North of Lion of URL was Prime Minister of South Africa from 30 November 1954 to his death on 24 August 1958.
Revised:  14 July 1893 – 24 August 1958), also known as Hans Strijdom and nicknamed the Lion of the North or the Lion of URL was Prime Minister of South Africa from 30 November 1954 to his death on 24 August 1958.
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Original:  Strijdom favoured the establishment of a republic, allegedly with himself as the first President of South URL but due to political controversy the step was not achieved until 1961, after his death, and then only with Governor-General Charles Swart assuming the position of symbolic State President over a Westminster system, as opposed to the executive presidency of the Boer Republics.
Revised:  Strijdom favoured the establishment of a republic, allegedly with himself as the first President of South URL but due to political controversy this step was not achieved until 1961, after his death, and then only with Governor-General Charles Swart assuming the position of symbolic State President over a Westminster system, as opposed to the executive presidency of the Boer Republics.
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Original:  Strijdom favoured the establishment of a republic, allegedly with himself as the first President of South URL but due to political controversy this step was not achieved until 1961, after his death, and then only with Governor-General Charles Swart assuming the position of symbolic State President over a Westminster system, as opposed to the executive presidency of the Boer Republics.
Revised:  Strijdom favoured the establishment of a republic, allegedly with himself as the first President of South Africa, but due to political controversy this step was not achieved until 1961, after his death, and then only with Governor-General Charles Swart assuming the position of symbolic State President over a Westminster system, as opposed to the executive presidency of the Boer Republics.
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Original:  Brazilian teen seels her virginity to pay mom's medical bills, Daily Dot As of March 2014, it was unknown what the outcome of the auction was. 
Revised:  Brazilian teen seels her virginity to pay mom's medical bills, Daily Dot As of March 2014, it was unknown what the outcome of the auction was. .
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Original: File:Raffaella Fico @ Casablanca 99 (Brescia).jpg|Italian model Raffaella Fico claimed in a 2008 interview that she would auction off her virginity, though the claim was not serious, and she never did so.
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Original:  The tragedy of the commons  is seen as a fundamental problem for the environment.
Revised:  A misunderstanding of the tragedy of the commons is seen as a fundamental problem for the environment.
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Original:  The tragedy of the commons  is seen as a fundamental problem for the environment.
Revised:  The tragedy of the commons , which is seen as a fundamental problem for the environment.
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Original:  The problem with regulation is that it puts property into a political commons, where individuals try to appropriate public resources for their own gain, a phenomenon called rent-seeking.
Revised:  A claimed problem with regulation is that it puts property into a political commons, where individuals try to appropriate public resources for their own gain, a phenomenon called rent-seeking.
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Original:   Tenure - Renters do not benefit from value accrued during their tenure and thus face an incentive to extract as much value as possible without conservation.
Revised:  citation needed Tenure - Renters do not benefit from value accrued during their tenure and thus face an incentive to extract as much value as possible without conservation.
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Original:  A claimed problem with regulation is that it puts property into a political commons, where individuals try to appropriate public resources for their own gain, a phenomenon called rent-seeking. citation needed Tenure - Renters do not benefit from value accrued during their tenure and thus face an incentive to extract as much value as possible without conservation.
Revised:  A claimed problem with regulation is that it puts property into a political commons, where individuals try to appropriate public resources for their own gain, a phenomenon called rent-seeking. Tenure - Renters do not benefit from value accrued during their tenure and thus face an incentive to extract as much value as possible without conservation.
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Original: Criticisms Some critics argue that free-market environmentalists have no method of dealing with collective problems like environmental degradation and natural resource depletion because of their rejection of collective regulation and control.
Revised: Criticisms Critics argue that free-market environmentalists have no method of dealing with collective problems like environmental degradation and natural resource depletion because of their rejection of collective regulation and control.
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Original:  On January 2 , 1931, Senator William E. Borah, the Chairman of the Senate Foreign Relations Committee, called for a withdrawal of American military personnel from Nicaragua.
Revised:  On 2 , 1931, Senator William E. Borah, the Chairman of the Senate Foreign Relations Committee, called for a withdrawal of American military personnel from Nicaragua.
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Original:  In August of 1971, the age of 19, he was transferred to Attica prison to serve the final months of his sentence..
Revised:  In August 1971, the age of 19, he was transferred to Attica prison to serve the final months of his sentence..
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Original: Personal life Boncore was born in Buffalo, NY , to a Mohawk/Cree mother and an Italian-American father.
Revised: Personal life Boncore was born in Buffalo, New York , to a Mohawk/Cree mother and an Italian-American father.
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Original: Death On March 13, 2013, Boncore was found dead near his home on the Adams Lake Indian Reserve near Chase, BC . Media reports indicate he is believed to have died on March 12, 2013, after falling on cement steps and possibly suffering a blow to the head.
Revised: Death On March 13, 2013, Boncore was found dead near his home on the Adams Lake Indian Reserve near Chase, British Columbia . Media reports indicate he is believed to have died on March 12, 2013, after falling on cement steps and possibly suffering a blow to the head.
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Original: Gerhard C. "Gerrie" Nel (, born 1961) is a South African advocate and prosecutor for the National Prosecuting Authority (NPA) of South Africa.
Revised: Gerhard C. "Gerrie" Nel (, born 1961) is a South African advocate . Until January 2017, he was a prosecutor for the National Prosecuting Authority (NPA) of South Africa.
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Original:  His focus at AfriForum was on setting up a new private prosecutions unit, which AfriForum said would operate in the interests of all South Africans..
Revised:  His focus at AfriForum was on setting up a private prosecutions unit, which AfriForum said would operate in the interests of all South Africans..
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Original:  In August 2017 Nel was prosecutor against Grace Mugabe, wife of Robert Mugabe after she assaulted the girlfriend of her URL
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Original:   He is nicknamed "Bulldog" for his tenacity in the courtroom, and is regularly assigned to difficult and high-profile cases.
Revised:  - He is nicknamed "Bulldog" for his tenacity in the courtroom, and is regularly assigned to difficult and high-profile cases.
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Original:   Education and legal career Nel matriculated from Hoërskool Piet Potgieter in Potgietersrus in the Limpopo province in 1979,  and studied law in Pretoria.
Revised:  - ← Education and legal career Nel matriculated from Hoërskool Piet Potgieter in Potgietersrus in the Limpopo province in 1979, and studied law in Pretoria.
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Original:   Education and legal career Nel matriculated from Hoërskool Piet Potgieter in Potgietersrus in the Limpopo province in 1979,  and studied law in Pretoria.
Revised:  Education and legal career Nel matriculated from Hoërskool Piet Potgieter in Potgietersrus in the Limpopo province in 1979, - and studied law in Pretoria.
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Original:   Nel was the lead prosecutor in the 2014 trial of Oscar Pistorius for the murder of Reeva Steenkamp and several gun-related charges. 
Revised:  - Nel was the lead prosecutor in the 2014 trial of Oscar Pistorius for the murder of Reeva Steenkamp and several gun-related charges. 
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Original:   Nel was the lead prosecutor in the 2014 trial of Oscar Pistorius for the murder of Reeva Steenkamp and several gun-related charges. 
Revised:  Nel was the lead prosecutor in the 2014 trial of Oscar Pistorius for the murder of Reeva Steenkamp and several gun-related charges. - -
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Original:  The studies from the USA  n = 85  had a dropout rate of 37.9\% (range: 33.0\% to 43.0\%).
Revised:  The studies from the USA ( n = 85 had a dropout rate of 37.9\% (range: 33.0\% to 43.0\%).
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Original:  The studies from the USA  n = 85  had a dropout rate of 37.9\% (range: 33.0\% to 43.0\%).
Revised:  The studies from the USA n = 85 ) had a dropout rate of 37.9\% (range: 33.0\% to 43.0\%).
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Original:  A very exhaustive meta-analysis of 146 studies in Western countries showed that the mean dropout rate is 34.8\% with a wide range of 10.3\% to 81.0\%.
Revised:  An exhaustive meta-analysis of 146 studies in Western countries showed that the mean dropout rate is 34.8\% with a wide range of 10.3\% to 81.0\%.
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Original: Fostering therapeutic alliance The therapeutic relationship is generally based on three concepts: a collaborative relationship, an effective bond between the therapist and patient, and the ability of both the client and therapist to agree on treatment goals.
Revised: Fostering therapeutic alliance The therapeutic relationship is generally based on three concepts: a collaborative relationship, an affective bond between the therapist and patient, and the ability of both the client and therapist to agree on treatment goals.
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Original:  (Long-term hemoglobinuria is associated with substantial desposition of hemosiderin in proximal tubule ( Excessive accumulation of hemosiderin in proximal tubule), fanconi syndrome (damaged renal re-absorption capability of small molecules which give rises to hyper-aminoaciduria, glycosuria, hyperphosphaturia, and bicarbonate and dehydration), and chronic renal failure.)
Revised:  (Long-term hemoglobinuria is associated with substantial deposition of hemosiderin in proximal tubule ( Excessive accumulation of hemosiderin in proximal tubule), fanconi syndrome (damaged renal re-absorption capability of small molecules which give rises to hyper-aminoaciduria, glycosuria, hyperphosphaturia, and bicarbonate and dehydration), and chronic renal failure.)
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Original:  (Long-term hemoglobinuria is associated with substantial desposition of hemosiderin in proximal tubule ( Excessive accumulation of hemosiderin in proximal tubule), fanconi syndrome (damaged renal re-absorption capability of small molecules which give rises to hyper-aminoaciduria, glycosuria, hyperphosphaturia, and bicarbonate and dehydration), and chronic renal failure.)
Revised:  (Long-term hemoglobinuria is associated with substantial desposition of hemosiderin in proximal tubule ( excessive accumulation of hemosiderin in proximal tubule), fanconi syndrome (damaged renal re-absorption capability of small molecules which give rises to hyper-aminoaciduria, glycosuria, hyperphosphaturia, and bicarbonate and dehydration), and chronic renal failure.)
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Original:  (Long-term hemoglobinuria is associated with substantial deposition of hemosiderin in proximal tubule (excessive accumulation of hemosiderin in proximal tubule), fanconi syndrome (damaged renal re-absorption capability of small molecules which give rises to hyper-aminoaciduria, glycosuria, hyperphosphaturia, and bicarbonate and dehydration), and chronic renal failure.)
Revised:  (Long-term hemoglobinuria is associated with substantial deposition of hemosiderin in proximal tubule (excessive accumulation of hemosiderin in proximal tubule), Fanconi syndrome (damaged renal re-absorption capability of small molecules which give rises to hyper-aminoaciduria, glycosuria, hyperphosphaturia, and bicarbonate and dehydration), and chronic renal failure.)
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Original:  (Long-term hemoglobinuria is associated with substantial deposition of hemosiderin in proximal tubule (excessive accumulation of hemosiderin in proximal tubule), Fanconi syndrome (damaged renal re-absorption capability of small molecules which give rises to hyper-aminoaciduria, glycosuria, hyperphosphaturia, and bicarbonate and dehydration), and chronic renal failure.)
Revised:  (Long-term hemoglobinuria is associated with substantial deposition of hemosiderin in proximal tubule (excessive accumulation of hemosiderin in proximal tubule), Fanconi syndrome (damaged renal re-absorption capability of small molecules which give rises to hyper-aminoaciduria, glycosuria, hyperphosphaturia, and bicarbonate and dehydration), and chronic kidney failure.)
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Original: Tarun Cherian is an award winning poet, artist psychic and spiritual healer of India.
Revised: Tarun Cherian is a poet, artist psychic and spiritual healer of India.
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Original:  Online references Past Life Regression and Holistic Healing by Tarun Cherian Spiritual Artist Tarun Cherian - Alliance Francaise A Piece of Heaven - Tarun Cherian's Art Exhibition Cherian on Death and Rebirth Tarun Cherian - A Biography Awaken the God Within - by Tarun Cherian Indian English Literature Indian Writing in English Indian poetry The Poetry Society (India)
Revised:  Online references Past Life Regression and Holistic Healing by Tarun Cherian Spiritual Artist Tarun Cherian – Alliance Francaise A Piece of Heaven - Tarun Cherian's Art Exhibition Cherian on Death and Rebirth Tarun Cherian - A Biography Awaken the God Within - by Tarun Cherian Indian English Literature Indian Writing in English Indian poetry The Poetry Society (India)
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Original:  Online references Past Life Regression and Holistic Healing by Tarun Cherian Spiritual Artist Tarun Cherian - Alliance Francaise A Piece of Heaven - Tarun Cherian's Art Exhibition Cherian on Death and Rebirth Tarun Cherian - A Biography Awaken the God Within - by Tarun Cherian Indian English Literature Indian Writing in English Indian poetry The Poetry Society (India)
Revised:  Online references Past Life Regression and Holistic Healing by Tarun Cherian Spiritual Artist Tarun Cherian - Alliance Francaise A Piece of Heaven – Tarun Cherian's Art Exhibition Cherian on Death and Rebirth Tarun Cherian - A Biography Awaken the God Within - by Tarun Cherian Indian English Literature Indian Writing in English Indian poetry The Poetry Society (India)
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Original:  Online references Past Life Regression and Holistic Healing by Tarun Cherian Spiritual Artist Tarun Cherian - Alliance Francaise A Piece of Heaven - Tarun Cherian's Art Exhibition Cherian on Death and Rebirth Tarun Cherian - A Biography Awaken the God Within - by Tarun Cherian Indian English Literature Indian Writing in English Indian poetry The Poetry Society (India)
Revised:  Online references Past Life Regression and Holistic Healing by Tarun Cherian Spiritual Artist Tarun Cherian - Alliance Francaise A Piece of Heaven - Tarun Cherian's Art Exhibition Cherian on Death and Rebirth Tarun Cherian – A Biography Awaken the God Within - by Tarun Cherian Indian English Literature Indian Writing in English Indian poetry The Poetry Society (India)
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Original:  Online references Past Life Regression and Holistic Healing by Tarun Cherian Spiritual Artist Tarun Cherian - Alliance Francaise A Piece of Heaven - Tarun Cherian's Art Exhibition Cherian on Death and Rebirth Tarun Cherian - A Biography Awaken the God Within - by Tarun Cherian Indian English Literature Indian Writing in English Indian poetry The Poetry Society (India)
Revised:  Online references Past Life Regression and Holistic Healing by Tarun Cherian Spiritual Artist Tarun Cherian - Alliance Francaise A Piece of Heaven - Tarun Cherian's Art Exhibition Cherian on Death and Rebirth Tarun Cherian - A Biography Awaken the God Within – by Tarun Cherian Indian English Literature Indian Writing in English Indian poetry The Poetry Society (India)
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Original: Biography Tarun Cherian obtained his Bachelor 's degree in Economics from the St.
Revised: Biography Tarun Cherian obtained his bachelor 's degree in Economics from the St.
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Original:  Stephen's College and Master 's degree from the Delhi School of Economics.
Revised:  Stephen's College and master 's degree from the Delhi School of Economics.
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Original:  For his celebrated poem A Writer's Prayer, he won the Second Prize in the All India Poetry Competition in 1990 organized by The Poetry Society (India) in collaboration with British Council.
Revised:  For his poem A Writer's Prayer, he won the Second Prize in the All India Poetry Competition in 1990 organized by The Poetry Society (India) in collaboration with British Council.
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Original:  He is also an award-winning art director of commercial advertisement.
Revised:  He is also an art director of commercial advertisement.
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Original:  The incident began when American Marines heard gunshots coming from the town of La Paz Centro (located halfway between Managua and Chinandega) at nearly 1:00 in the morning and decided to investigate.
Revised:  The Battle The incident began when American Marines heard gunshots coming from the town of La Paz Centro (located halfway between Managua and Chinandega) at nearly 1:00 in the morning and decided to investigate.
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Original:  Fourteen of their corpses were found on the battlefield, some of which were wearing the red hatband of the rebel Liberal army.
Revised:  Aftermath Fourteen rebel corpses were found on the battlefield, some of which were wearing the red hatband of the rebel Liberal army.
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Original: Image Country Place Year Type/Number NotesUSAArizona , Mount Graham2010John Wetenhall:
Revised: Image Country Place Year Type/Number NotesUnited StatesArizona , Mount Graham2010John Wetenhall:
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Original:  Arizona Spends $1.25M to Save 250 Squirrels abcnews.go.com, June 17, 201041 rope bridges Protects the Mount Graham Red Squirrel100x100pxUSANutty Narrows Bridge, Longview, Washington1963Suspension bridgeBelgiumBrussels, Ring 02013Plaatsing boombrug over de ring om Brussel (R0), July 10, 2013Primeur: boombrug in Zoniënwoud, zonienwoud.beRopes/nets and steel pipe attached to a gantryBelgiumBrecht, Belgium, Andrélaan2013Neel Vermeiren: Bomen Andrélaan verbonden met touw.
Revised:  Arizona Spends $1.25M to Save 250 Squirrels abcnews.go.com, June 17, 201041 rope bridges Protects the Mount Graham Red Squirrel100x100pxUnited StatesNutty Narrows Bridge, Longview, Washington1963Suspension bridgeBelgiumBrussels, Ring 02013Plaatsing boombrug over de ring om Brussel (R0), July 10, 2013Primeur: boombrug in Zoniënwoud, zonienwoud.beRopes/nets and steel pipe attached to a gantryBelgiumBrecht, Belgium, Andrélaan2013Neel Vermeiren: Bomen Andrélaan verbonden met touw.
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Original:  Arizona Spends $1.25M to Save 250 Squirrels abcnews.go.com, June 17, 201041 rope bridges Protects the Mount Graham Red Squirrel100x100pxUnited StatesNutty Narrows Bridge, Longview, Washington1963Suspension bridgeBelgiumBrussels, Ring 02013Plaatsing boombrug over de ring om Brussel (R0), July 10, 2013Primeur: boombrug in Zoniënwoud, zonienwoud.beRopes /nets and steel pipe attached to a gantryBelgiumBrecht, Belgium, Andrélaan2013Neel Vermeiren: Bomen Andrélaan verbonden met touw.
Revised:  Arizona Spends $1.25M to Save 250 Squirrels abcnews.go.com, June 17, 201041 rope bridges Protects the Mount Graham Red Squirrel100x100pxUnited StatesNutty Narrows Bridge, Longview, Washington1963Suspension bridgeBelgiumBrussels, Ring 02013Ropes /nets and steel pipe attached to a gantryBelgiumBrecht, Belgium, Andrélaan2013Neel Vermeiren: Bomen Andrélaan verbonden met touw.
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Original:  URL March 14, 2012Rope bridge„Écureuilloduc“NetherlandsRijksweg 12, Kilometer 73, 902012Boombruggen, mjpo.nl100x100pxNetherlandsThe Hague, Benoordenhoutseweg2012Den Haag heeft de duurste eekhoornbrug rtlnieuws.nl Eekhoorns negeren peperdure brug De Telegraaf, October 18, 2013A camera monitoring the bridge has shown that squirrels largely ignore the URL Europaboulevard in Amstelpark2011/ 2012Eekhoornbrug Beschreibung mit FotosParallel ropes connected to netting.
Revised:  URL March 14, 2012Rope bridge„Écureuilloduc“NetherlandsRijksweg 12, Kilometer 73, 902012100x100pxNetherlandsThe Hague, Benoordenhoutseweg2012A camera monitoring the bridge has shown that squirrels largely ignore the URL Europaboulevard in Amstelpark2011/ 2012Eekhoornbrug Beschreibung mit FotosParallel ropes connected to netting.
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Original:  URL March 14, 2012Rope bridge„Écureuilloduc“NetherlandsRijksweg 12, Kilometer 73, 902012Boombruggen, mjpo.nl100x100pxNetherlandsThe Hague, Benoordenhoutseweg2012Den Haag heeft de duurste eekhoornbrug rtlnieuws.nl Eekhoorns negeren peperdure brug De Telegraaf, October 18, 2013A camera monitoring the bridge has shown that squirrels largely ignore the URL Europaboulevard in Amstelpark2011/ 2012Eekhoornbrug Beschreibung mit FotosParallel ropes connected to netting.
Revised:  URL March 14, 2012Rope bridge„Écureuilloduc“NetherlandsRijksweg 12, Kilometer 73, 902012Boombruggen, mjpo.nl100x100pxNetherlandsThe Hague, Benoordenhoutseweg2012Den Haag heeft de duurste eekhoornbrug rtlnieuws.nl Eekhoorns negeren peperdure brug De Telegraaf, October 18, 2013A camera monitoring the bridge has shown that squirrels largely ignore the bridge.100x100pxNetherlandsAmsterdam, Europaboulevard in Amstelpark2011/ 2012Eekhoornbrug Beschreibung mit FotosParallel ropes connected to netting.
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