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Original: His teammate Rubens Barrichello finished second, thanks to the use of a nore efficient three-stop fuel strategy to be a runner-up instead of Sebastian Vettel from Red Bull . Australian Mark Webber also gained from an earlier pit-stop to overtake his teammate Vettel and finished third . Sebastien Vettel himself chased  Ferrari car of Felipe Massa  who successfully defended his position using his 'special' button but was short of fuel and slowed on the dying laps of the race.
Revised: His teammate Rubens Barrichello finished second, thanks to the use of a nore efficient three-stop fuel strategy to be a runner-up instead of Sebastian Vettel from Red Bull . Australian Mark Webber also gained from an earlier pit-stop to overtake his teammate Vettel and finished third . Sebastien Vettel himself chased the Ferrari car of Felipe Massa who successfully defended his position using his 'special' button but was short of fuel and slowed on the dying laps of the race.
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Original: His teammate Rubens Barrichello finished second, thanks to the use of a nore efficient three-stop fuel strategy to be a runner-up instead of Sebastian Vettel from Red Bull . Australian Mark Webber also gained from an earlier pit-stop to overtake his teammate Vettel and finished third . Sebastien Vettel himself chased  Ferrari car of Felipe Massa  who successfully defended his position using his 'special' button but was short of fuel and slowed on the dying laps of the race.
Revised: His teammate Rubens Barrichello finished second, thanks to the use of a nore efficient three-stop fuel strategy to be a runner-up instead of Sebastian Vettel from Red Bull . Australian Mark Webber also gained from an earlier pit-stop to overtake his teammate Vettel and finished third . Sebastien Vettel himself chased Ferrari car of Felipe Massa , who successfully defended his position using his 'special' button but was short of fuel and slowed on the dying laps of the race.
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Original: His teammate Rubens Barrichello finished second, thanks to the use of a nore efficient three-stop fuel strategy to be a runner-up instead of Sebastian Vettel from Red Bull . Australian Mark Webber also gained from an earlier pit-stop to overtake his teammate Vettel and finished third . Sebastien Vettel himself chased  Ferrari car of Felipe Massa  who successfully defended his position using his 'special' button but was short of fuel and slowed on the dying laps of the race.
Revised: His teammate Rubens Barrichello finished second, thanks to the use of a nore efficient three-stop fuel strategy to be a runner-up instead of Sebastian Vettel from Red Bull . Australian Mark Webber also gained from an earlier pit-stop to overtake his teammate Vettel and finished third . Sebastien Vettel himself chased Ferrari car of Felipe Massa who successfully defended his position using his 'special' button but was short of fuel and needed to slow on the dying laps of the race.
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Original:  Both  Red Bull's finished after both Ross Brawn team cars.
Revised:  Both of Red Bull's finished after both Ross Brawn team cars.
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Original:  Both  Red Bull's finished after both Ross Brawn team cars.
Revised:  Both Red Bull's cars finished after the two Ross Brawn team cars.
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Original:  Renault driver Fernando Alonso also slipped through Massa on the last lap to be 5th.
Revised:  Renault driver Fernando Alonso also slipped passed Massa on the last lap to be 5th.
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Original:  Renault driver Fernando Alonso also slipped through Massa on the last lap to be 5th.
Revised:  Renault driver Fernando Alonso also slipped through Massa on the last lap to secure 5th.
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Original:  Top eight closed by two Germans Nick Heidfeld (BMW Sauber) and Nico Rosberg (Williams).
Revised:  The top eight were closed out by two Germans Nick Heidfeld (BMW Sauber) and Nico Rosberg (Williams).
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Original:  Drivers ' championship leader is Jenson Button  14 points ahead of his teammate and 18 over Vettelas is the Constructors' standings dominated by BrawnGP drivers with nearly 30 points lead over Red Bull
Revised:  The drivers ' championship leader is Jenson Button 14 points ahead of his teammate and 18 over Vettelas is the Constructors' standings dominated by BrawnGP drivers with nearly 30 points lead over Red Bull
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Original:  Drivers ' championship leader is Jenson Button  14 points ahead of his teammate and 18 over Vettelas is the Constructors' standings dominated by BrawnGP drivers with nearly 30 points lead over Red Bull
Revised:  Drivers ' championship leader is Jenson Button , who is 14 points ahead of his teammate and 18 over Vettelas is the Constructors' standings dominated by BrawnGP drivers with nearly 30 points lead over Red Bull
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Original:  Drivers ' championship leader is Jenson Button  14 points ahead of his teammate and 18 over Vettelas is the Constructors' standings dominated by BrawnGP drivers with nearly 30 points lead over Red Bull
Revised:  Drivers ' championship leader is Jenson Button 14 points ahead of his teammate and 18 ahead of Vettel. The constructors' standings are dominated by BrawnGP drivers with nearly 30 points lead over Red Bull
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Original:  The U.S. District Court for the Western District of Kentucky has convicted former soldier Pfc.
Revised: main| The U.S. District Court for the Western District of Kentucky has convicted former soldier Pfc.
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Original: main| The U.S. District Court for the Western District of Kentucky has convicted former soldier Pfc.
Revised:  The U.S. District Court for the Western District of Kentucky has convicted former soldier Pfc.
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Original:  A war veteran shares his views with local media and crowd post official celebrations in Moscow.
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Original:  Estimates of more than 27 million lost lives during the war continues to leave a vain of sadness in Russia.
Revised:  Estimates of more than 27 million lost lives during the war continues to leave a vein of sadness in Russia.
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Original:  Celebrations continue late into the night with military bands playing while youth danced with Windows at Leningradsky Station.
Revised:  Celebrations continue late into the night with military bands playing while youth danced with widows at Leningradsky Station.
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Original:  At Leningradsky station departing veterans and widows danced and celebrated with today’s generation whilst loudly singing the national anthem.
Revised:  At Leningradsky station departing veterans and widows danced and celebrated with younger generations whilst loudly singing the national anthem.
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Original:  Final dress rehearsals took place in Moscow on 7th May including a full practice of the air show.
Revised:  Final dress rehearsals took place in Moscow on May 7 including a full practice of the air show.
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Original:  On display for the first time was the S-400 air defense system which is capable of intercepting airborne targets at ranges up to 400 kilometers . Following the official parades and ceremonies, Red Square and the the inner city was opened to the public, albeit under extreme security and an ever watching eye from Interior Ministry troops.
Revised:  On display for the first time was the S-400 air defense system which is capable of intercepting airborne targets at ranges up to . Following the official parades and ceremonies, Red Square and the the inner city was opened to the public, albeit under extreme security and an ever watching eye from Interior Ministry troops.
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Original:  During the afternoon  an estimated crowed  over 100,000 and entered Red Square to admire the parade ground and decorations, including the official stand for the dignitaries.
Revised:  During the afternoon there was an estimated crowed over 100,000 and entered Red Square to admire the parade ground and decorations, including the official stand for the dignitaries.
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Original:  During the afternoon  an estimated crowed  over 100,000 and entered Red Square to admire the parade ground and decorations, including the official stand for the dignitaries.
Revised:  During the afternoon an estimated crowed of over 100,000 and entered Red Square to admire the parade ground and decorations, including the official stand for the dignitaries.
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Original:  During the afternoon  an estimated crowed  over 100,000 and entered Red Square to admire the parade ground and decorations, including the official stand for the dignitaries.
Revised:  During the afternoon an estimated crowed over 100,000 which entered Red Square to admire the parade ground and decorations, including the official stand for the dignitaries.
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Original: A war veteran shares his views with local media and crowd post official celebrations in Moscow.
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Original:  This flood has been the worst to strike the area since the 1950s and officials estimate damages at one billion reais (about US 482 million).
Revised:  This flood has been the worst to strike the area since the 1950s and officials estimate damages at one billion (about 482 million).
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Original:  Bahia on the Atlantic coast has suffered seven fatalaties .
Revised:  Bahia on the Atlantic coast has suffered seven fatalities .
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Original:  The state of Amazonas has lost eight people so far.
Revised:  The state of has lost eight people so far.
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Original:  The Rio Negro , the largest tributary of the Amazon has been rising.
Revised:  The , the largest tributary of the Amazon has been rising.
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Original:  The Rio Negro , the largest tributary of the Amazon has been rising.
Revised:  The Rio Negro , the largest tributary of the , has been rising.
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Original:  Piauí is suffering from two swollen rivers, no electricity due to power failures, and no potable water.
Revised:  is suffering from two swollen rivers, no electricity due to power failures, and no potable water.
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Original:  Besides drowning, electrocution is also taking victims. rattlesnakes and anacondas, and alligators are also displaced and are swimming through partially submerged communities in the swollen waters.
Revised:  Besides drowning, electrocution is also taking victims. and , and are also displaced and are swimming through partially submerged communities in the swollen waters.
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Original:  This northeastern region of Brazil typically endures drought-like conditions. meteorologists are baffled by the deluge of rain which hit the area for the past fourteen days.
Revised:  This northeastern region of Brazil typically endures conditions. are baffled by the deluge of rain which hit the area for the past fourteen days.
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Original: "We’re going to take a look at trying to make sure we correct those things we can correct, but certainly to tie the hands of our commanders and say we’re not going to conduct airstrikes would be imprudent," Jones said in ant interview with ABC News, as quoted by the New York Times.
Revised: "We’re going to take a look at trying to make sure we correct those things we can correct, but certainly to tie the hands of our commanders and say we’re not going to conduct airstrikes would be imprudent," Jones said in an interview with ABC News, as quoted by the New York Times.
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Original:   "    We’re going to take a look at trying to make sure we correct those things we can correct, but certainly to tie the hands of our commanders and say we’re not going to conduct airstrikes would be imprudent,"
Revised:  " " We’re going to take a look at trying to make sure we correct those things we can correct, but certainly to tie the hands of our commanders and say we’re not going to conduct airstrikes would be imprudent,"
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Original:  Jones said in an interview with ABC News, as quoted by the New York Times . U.S. president Barack Obama says he vows to continue the fight against the Taliban even after Afghanistan's president, Hamid Karzai, criticized the attacks saying too many civilians were being killed and that the U.S. could lose a "moral" battle against the Taliban .
Revised:  Jones said in an interview with ABC News, as quoted by the New York Times .
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Original:  She is, however, forbidden from  journalism in Iran for five years.
Revised:  She is, however, forbidden from practicing journalism in Iran for five years.
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Original:  She is, however, forbidden from practicing journalism in Iran for five years .
Revised:  She is, however, forbidden from practicing journalism for at least five years in Iran .
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Original:  At the time, according to Iran's national media, Saberi admitted to spying  
Revised:  At the time, according to Iran's national media, Saberi admitted to spying . 
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Original:  Saberi was arrested in April and accused of spying 
Revised:  Saberi was arrested in April and accused of spying .
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Original: During the 11 day repair mission to the HST, astronauts will embark on five spacewalks, install two new instruments and repair two others.
Revised: During the 11 day repair mission to the HST, astronauts will embark on five spacewalks, installing two new instruments and repair two others.
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Original: During the 11 day repair mission to the HST, astronauts will embark on five spacewalks, install two new instruments and repair two others.
Revised: During the 11 day repair mission to the HST, astronauts will embark on five spacewalks, install two new instruments and repairing two others.
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Original: "If you are watching this message," Rosenberg told the camera, "it is because I was assassinated by President Álvaro Colom with help from ( private secretary to the president ) Gustavo Alejos."
Revised: "If you are watching this message," Rosenberg told the camera, "it is because I was assassinated by President Álvaro Colom with help from private secretary to the president ) Gustavo Alejos."
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Original: "If you are watching this message," Rosenberg told the camera, "it is because I was assassinated by President Álvaro Colom with help from ( private secretary to the president ) Gustavo Alejos."
Revised: "If you are watching this message," Rosenberg told the camera, "it is because I was assassinated by President Álvaro Colom with help from ( private secretary to the president Gustavo Alejos."
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Original:  Rosenberg was shot on Sunday while riding his bicycle in Zona 14 of Guatemala City.
Revised:  Rosenberg was shot on Sunday while riding his bicycle in Zone 14 of Guatemala City.
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Original: The fighting is between al-Shabab, an insurgent organisation wanting to oust Somaila 's current government and install an Islamic state, and pro-government fighters.
Revised: The fighting is between al-Shabab, an insurgent organisation wanting to oust Somalia 's current government and install an Islamic state, and pro-government fighters.
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Original:  He said that the outburst of violence in the capital had taken residents by surprise  
Revised:  He said that the outburst of violence in the capital had taken residents by surprise . 
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Original:  This fragment respresents only 12 base pairs, while the human genome consists of over 3 billion base pairs.
Revised:  This image presents only 12 base pairs, while the human genome consists of over 3 billion base pairs.
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Original:  Director Gerardo Jiménez Sánchez presented the genomic map of Mexicans, a stepping-stone for Latin American genomic medicine as previous  endeavours of this kind had so far only covered some of the most ancient races on the planet, native from Africa, Europe and Asia  . During the ceremony , President Felipe Calderón  uploaded the map to the Internet making it publicly available , after he was symbolically presented with a hard copy of it by Jiménez.
Revised:  Director Gerardo Jiménez Sánchez presented the genomic map of Mexicans, a stepping-stone for Latin American genomic medicine . endeavours of this kind had so far only covered some of the most ancient races on the planet, native from Africa, Europe and Asia . During the ceremony , President Felipe Calderón uploaded the map to the Internet making it publicly available , after he was symbolically presented with a hard copy of it by Jiménez.
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Original:  Among other results, the five year-long work found that, although humans share 99.9\% of their genome, the Mexican population has a genetic structure of its own , making it unfeasible to import genome maps from other groups  , and hence justifying the study.
Revised:  Among other results, the five year-long work found that, although humans share 99.9\% of their genome, the Mexican population has a genetic structure of its own . This makes importing genome maps from other groups , and hence justifying the study.
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Original:  Among other results, the five year-long work found that, although humans share 99.9\% of their genome, the Mexican population has a genetic structure of its own , making it unfeasible to import genome maps from other groups  , and hence justifying the study.
Revised:  Among other results, the five year-long work found that, although humans share 99.9\% of their genome, the Mexican population has a genetic structure of its own , making it unfeasible to import genome maps from other groups , and hence justifies the study.
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Original:  Genetic diversity within the country was also analyzed through samples from six geographically distant states , revealing that ancestry can vary from 36\% Amerindian and 62\% European in the Northern state of Sonora, to 70\% Amerindian and 30\% European in the Southern state of Guerrero, which correlates with Amerindian population density throughout Mexico's history.
Revised:  Genetic diversity within the country was also analyzed through samples from six geographically distant states . This revealed that ancestry can vary from 36\% Amerindian and 62\% European in the Northern state of Sonora, to 70\% Amerindian and 30\% European in the Southern state of Guerrero, which correlates with Amerindian population density throughout Mexico's history.
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Original:  Recently, however, Inmegen's Multifactorial Diseases Genomic Research Laboratory head Lorena Orozco revealed that one fifth of the Mexican population have genes in their immune system that can trigger an immune overreaction in presence of some diseases , and that one of these genes causes symptoms similar to the ones A/H1N1 victims presented, which makes it a strong candidate for explaining these deaths.
Revised:  Recently, however, Inmegen's Multifactorial Diseases Genomic Research Laboratory head Lorena Orozco revealed that one fifth of the Mexican population have genes in their immune system that can trigger an immune overreaction in presence of some diseases . According to Orozco one of these genes causes symptoms similar to the ones A/H1N1 victims presented, which makes it a strong candidate for explaining these deaths.
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Original:  Recently, however, Inmegen's Multifactorial Diseases Genomic Research Laboratory head Lorena Orozco revealed that one fifth of the Mexican population have genes in their immune system that can trigger an immune overreaction in presence of some diseases , and that one of these genes causes symptoms similar to the ones A/H1N1 victims presented, which makes it a strong candidate for explaining these deaths.
Revised:  Recently, however, Inmegen's Multifactorial Diseases Genomic Research Laboratory head Lorena Orozco revealed that one fifth of the Mexican population have genes in their immune system that can trigger an immune overreaction in presence of some diseases , and that one of these genes is responsible for symptoms similar to the ones A/H1N1 victims presented, which makes it a strong candidate for explaining these deaths.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Genetic analyses aimed at common disorders in Mexico like diabetes, obesity and breast cancer are yet to be performed.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% analyses aimed at common disorders in Mexico like diabetes, obesity and breast cancer are yet to be performed.
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Original: Among other results, the five year-long work found that, although humans share 99.9\% of their genome , the Mexican population has a genetic structure of its own .
Revised: Among other results, the five year-long work found that, while sharing the 99.9\% of their genome , the Mexican population has a genetic structure of its own .
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Original:  Martin will today address the House of Commons at 15:30 BST ( UTC+1 ).
Revised:  Martin addressed the House of Commons at 15:30 BST ( UTC+1 ).
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Original:  In the past, Martin has been involved in several past scandals, including that he made excessive claims for the use of taxis, and for over £1,600,000 spent on the Speaker's residence .
Revised:  In the past, Martin has been involved in several past scandals, including that he made excessive claims for the use of taxis, and for over £1,600,000 spent on the Speaker's residence 
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Original:   " No matter if you don’t feel well, the weather is nasty, or you just don’t have time,many people feel like Geoffrey Theobald who said ]   , “Keeping a large dog shut indoors in a small space and overfeeding is a form of cruelty.
Revised:  When authorities arrived to West's residence, they found Taz's feces scattered around the house and in every room. Authorities made several more visits to West's home until March 2009. They had found no improvements in living conditions and seized the dog. West had said he had been ill with the flu and was unable to clean up after Taz or take him for walks. He admits that he and his friends overfed Taz which led to his obesity, but West says it was not intentional. " No matter if you don’t feel well, the weather is nasty, or you just don’t have time,many people feel like Geoffrey Theobald who said ] , “Keeping a large dog shut indoors in a small space and overfeeding is a form of cruelty.
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Original:  Authorities discovered the case of neglect in December 2008 when a neighbor complained that his border collie Taz appeared to be too fat.
Revised:  Authorities discovered the case of neglect in December 2008 when a neighbor complained that his Border Collie Taz appeared to be too fat.
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Original:  You can be cruel with kindness," said west in March, according to the police report.
Revised:  You can be cruel with kindness," said West in March, according to the police report.
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Original:  When sentenced, West could face a fine of  £5,000 (US$7,581), six months in prison, or may be forbidden from owning any pets
Revised:  When sentenced, West could face a fine of up to £5,000 (US$7,581), six months in prison, or may be forbidden from owning any pets
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Original:  When sentenced, West could face a fine of  £5,000 (US$7,581), six months in prison, or may be forbidden from owning any pets
Revised:  When sentenced, West could face a fine of £5,000 (US$7,581), six months in prison, and may be forbidden from owning any pets
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Original:  Since being in the custody of animal care authorities, Taz has lost more than 55lbs (25kg), weighing in at about 66lbs (30kg).
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Original: A man in the United Kingdom named Ronald West, has been convicted of animal neglect after authorities received a complaints about his five-year-old dog being severely overweight.
Revised: A British man, Ronald West, has been convicted of animal neglect after authorities received a complaints about his five-year-old dog being severely overweight.
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