wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  · Countries which report large scale outbreaks can expect to experience widespread panic and economic loss, as occurred with SARS.
Revised:  Countries which report large scale outbreaks can expect to experience widespread panic and economic loss, as occurred with SARS.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: “ These factors can be seen at work in the way that the first bird flu death was reported in China, ” Dr. Zimmerman stated.
Revised: " These factors can be seen at work in the way that the first bird flu death was reported in China, ” Dr. Zimmerman stated.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: “ These factors can be seen at work in the way that the first bird flu death was reported in China, ” Dr. Zimmerman stated.
Revised: “ These factors can be seen at work in the way that the first bird flu death was reported in China, " Dr. Zimmerman stated.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  ‘ We were scared to death, ’ said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside of wall of her home that said: ‘ Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people.
Revised:  " We were scared to death, ’ said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside of wall of her home that said: ‘ Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  ‘ We were scared to death, ’ said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside of wall of her home that said: ‘ Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people.
Revised:  ‘ We were scared to death, " said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside of wall of her home that said: ‘ Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  ‘ We were scared to death, ’ said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside of wall of her home that said: ‘ Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people.
Revised:  ‘ We were scared to death, ’ said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside of wall of her home that said: " Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  ’ But Fan explained that her birds did not have bird flu, rather some hooligan had poisoned them along with the dog.
Revised:  " But Fan explained that her birds did not have bird flu, rather some hooligan had poisoned them along with the dog.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: " Reporting a suspected bird flu infection in bird or humans is a very unlikely event, " said Dr.
Revised: ' Reporting a suspected bird flu infection in bird or humans is a very unlikely event, " said Dr.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: " Reporting a suspected bird flu infection in bird or humans is a very unlikely event, " said Dr.
Revised: " Reporting a suspected bird flu infection in bird or humans is a very unlikely event, ' said Dr.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The worse threat is that their flocks could be culled (killed) leaving them destitute. "
Revised:  The worse threat is that their flocks could be culled (killed) leaving them destitute. '
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Under reporting of bird flu infections in China and other Southeast Asian countries gives the whole world a sense that human infections are quite limited.
Revised: Possible under reporting of bird flu infections in China and other Southeast Asian countries gives the whole world a sense that human infections are quite limited.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Under reporting of bird flu infections in China and other Southeast Asian countries gives the whole world a sense that human infections are quite limited.
Revised: Under reporting of bird flu infections in China and other Southeast Asian countries may be promoting an illusory sense that human infections are quite limited.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The press frequently reports that fewer than 130 people have been infected with H5N1 avian flu and under 70 have died worldwide.
Revised:  The press frequently reports that fewer than 130 people as infected with H5N1 avian flu and under 70 have died worldwide.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The press frequently reports that fewer than 130 people have been infected with H5N1 avian flu and under 70 have died worldwide.
Revised:  The press frequently reports that fewer than 130 people have been infected with H5N1 avian flu and that fewer than 70 have died worldwide.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  These numbers may give a false sense of security, because there are enormous problems getting accurate data, especially in a country like China with a billion + population .
Revised:  Yet, there are enormous problems getting accurate data, especially in a country like China with a billion + population .
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  These numbers may give a false sense of security, because there are enormous problems getting accurate data, especially in a country like China with a billion + population .
Revised:  These numbers may give a false sense of security, because there are enormous problems getting accurate data, especially in a country like China with a population of more than a billion .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Farmers are used to chickens, ducks and birds dying all the time .
Revised:  The deat of chickens, ducks and birds dying all the time .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Farmers are used to chickens, ducks and birds dying all the time .
Revised:  Farmers are used to chickens, ducks and birds are common events for farmer .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  When a human dies in locations with little or no medical services, discovering the cause of death may not be at the top of a rural farmer’s list of priorities . Bird flu symptoms are not widely known.
Revised:  When a human dies in locations with little or no medical services, the rural farmer’s list of priorities . Bird flu symptoms are not widely known.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  If  symptoms are not recognized, farmers certainly won't know when to report possible bird or human infections  . Confirming bird flu infections is costly, difficult and time consuming.
Revised:  If the symptoms are not recognized, farmers certainly won't know when to report possible bird or human infections . Confirming bird flu infections is costly, difficult and time consuming.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  If  symptoms are not recognized, farmers certainly won't know when to report possible bird or human infections  . Confirming bird flu infections is costly, difficult and time consuming.
Revised:  If symptoms are not known, they will not be recognized and reports of possible bird or human infections . Confirming bird flu infections is costly, difficult and time consuming.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  If  symptoms are not recognized, farmers certainly won't know when to report possible bird or human infections  . Confirming bird flu infections is costly, difficult and time consuming.
Revised:  If symptoms are not recognized, farmers certainly won't know when to report possible bird or human infections can not be made . Confirming bird flu infections is costly, difficult and time consuming.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  This can be prohibitively expensive, especially for poor countries . Countries which report large scale outbreaks can expect to experience widespread panic and economic loss, as occurred with SARS.
Revised:  This can be prohibitively expensive, especially for poor countries . Countries which report large scale outbreaks as it may lead to widespread panic and economic loss, as occurred with SARS.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  " These factors can be seen at work in the way that the first bird flu death was reported in China," Dr. Zimmerman stated.
Revised:  These factors can be seen at work in the way that the first bird flu death was reported in China," Dr. Zimmerman stated.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  A young woman, Zhou Maoya, died when she returned to home to the village of Yantan in Annui province to prepare for her wedding.
Revised:  A young woman, Zhou Maoya, died after returning home to the village of Yantan in Annui province to prepare for her wedding.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Her family said they did not take her to the hospital because they thought it would not do any good.
Revised:  Her family has stated that they did not take her to the hospital because they thought it would not do any good.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  But officials noted rural Chinese also often cite relatively expensive medical costs as a reason for not seeking treatment when sick.
Revised:  Officials also note rural Chinese also often cite relatively expensive medical costs as a reason for not seeking treatment when sick.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The Chinese authorities then changed their position , attributing her death to bird flu because her reported symptoms matched those of bird flu. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The village was quarantined and journalists were denied access so it is not known how many others might be infected in the village.
Revised:  The authorities then rescinded the previous position and attributed her death to bird flu because her reported symptoms matched those of bird flu. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The village was quarantined and journalists were denied access so it is not known how many others might be infected in the village.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The Chinese authorities then changed their position , attributing her death to bird flu because her reported symptoms matched those of bird flu. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The village was quarantined and journalists were denied access so it is not known how many others might be infected in the village.
Revised:  The Chinese authorities then changed their position , attributing her death to bird flu based on the similarity of the symptoms that she was reported to exhibit with those of bird flu. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The village was quarantined and journalists were denied access so it is not known how many others might be infected in the village.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The Chinese authorities then changed their position , attributing her death to bird flu because her reported symptoms matched those of bird flu. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The village was quarantined and journalists were denied access so it is not known how many others might be infected in the village.
Revised:  The Chinese authorities then changed their position , attributing her death to bird flu because her reported symptoms matched those of bird flu. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The village was quarantined and journalists were denied access . It is not known how many others might be infected in the village.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  In outlying areas of Yantan, residents said they knew of no new outbreaks.
Revised:  In outlying areas of Yantan, residents said that they did not know of any new outbreaks.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  While formally supporting government slogans to control bird flu, possible infections have been attributed to other causes , without any testing for validation .
Revised:  Other possible infections have been attributed to other causes , without any testing for validation .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A woman who lost many ducks, chickens and a dog even attributed the death to hooligans.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Fan Litan, a peasant woman from Fantu village, about 2 miles from Yantan,  said her family had been extremely frightened when her dog and some of the 20 odd ducks as well as chickens she raised had suddenly died. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "We were scared to death," said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside of wall of her home that said: "Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people."
Revised:  Fan Litan, a peasant woman from Fantu village, about 2 miles from Yantan, said her family had been extremely frightened when her animals suddenly died. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "We were scared to death," said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside of wall of her home that said: "Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people."
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Fan Litan, a peasant woman from Fantu village, about 2 miles from Yantan,  said her family had been extremely frightened when her dog and some of the 20 odd ducks as well as chickens she raised had suddenly died. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "We were scared to death," said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside of wall of her home that said: "Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people."
Revised:  Fan Litan, a peasant woman from Fantu village, about 2 miles from Yantan, said her family had been extremely frightened when her dog and some of the 20 odd ducks as well as chickens she raised had suddenly died. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "We were scared to death," said Fan, standing next to a red sign posted on the outside wall of her home that said: "Prevention and control by the masses is basic for people."
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  No testing of her birds was reported .
Revised:  No testing of of these birds has been reported yet .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A local government official, Fan Qian, told AFP that it was believed Zhou was infected while she was outside of the province.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  However, they neglected to describe what the symptoms of H5N1 bird flu actually were . Residents do not know what symptoms to look for if poultry become ill -- fever, diarrhea, teary eyes and swelling in the legs of the birds.
Revised:  However, the symptoms of H5N1 bird flu actually were . Residents do not know what symptoms to look for if poultry become ill -- fever, diarrhea, teary eyes and swelling in the legs of the birds.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  However, they neglected to describe what the symptoms of H5N1 bird flu actually were . Residents do not know what symptoms to look for if poultry become ill -- fever, diarrhea, teary eyes and swelling in the legs of the birds.
Revised:  However, they neglected to describe what the symptoms of H5N1 bird flu actually were . Residents have not yet been fully informed of what symptoms to look for if poultry become ill -- fever, diarrhea, teary eyes and swelling in the legs of the birds.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  However, they neglected to describe what the symptoms of H5N1 bird flu actually were . Residents do not know what symptoms to look for if poultry become ill -- fever, diarrhea, teary eyes and swelling in the legs of the birds.
Revised:  However, they neglected to describe what the symptoms of H5N1 bird flu actually were . Residents do not know what symptoms to look for in ill poultry--they are fever, diarrhea, teary eyes and swelling in the legs of the birds.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  And there have been no reported bird vaccinations in this area, despite the pledge earlier in the week to vaccinate 2 million birds immediately .
Revised:  Though a pledge was made earlier in the week to vaccinate 2 million birds immediately .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In another nearby village of 100 , Nazahuang, chickens scuttle in and out of houses.
Revised:  In another nearby village , Nazahuang, chickens scuttle in and out of houses.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  One resident, Fan Jiexu, 73, said no officials had come to warn her village to take precautions.
Revised:  One resident, Fan Jiexu, 73, said no officials had yet warned her village to take precautions.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Throughout rural areas, it is customary to have chickens scuttle in and out of homes.
Revised:  Throughout rural areas, it is customary for chickens to scuttle in and out of homes.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Ducks and bird often die and when villagers think it is okay they eat them.
Revised:  Ducks and bird often die and 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  While the Chinese government issues high alerts, critical information does not necessarily get to the rural villagesthat need the information most.
Revised:  Despite the Chinese government issues high alerts, critical information does not necessarily get to the rural villagesthat need the information most.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  While the Chinese government issues high alerts, critical information does not necessarily get to the rural villagesthat need the information most.
Revised:  While the Chinese government issued high alerts, critical information does not necessarily get to the rural villagesthat need the information most.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The sheer size of the poultry population, the fact that it is normal for some poultry to die on farms, and that 70\% of a poultry population is being kept in the backyard are factors that make infection controlalmost impossible .
Revised:  The sheer size of the poultry population, the common and normal occurrence of poultry death on farms, and that 70\% of a poultry population is being kept in the backyard are factors that make infection controlalmost impossible .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The sheer size of the poultry population, the fact that it is normal for some poultry to die on farms, and that 70\% of a poultry population is being kept in the backyard are factors that make infection controlalmost impossible .
Revised:  The sheer size of the poultry population, the fact that it is normal for some poultry to die on farms, and status of roughly 70\% of a poultry population is being kept in the backyard are factors that make infection controlalmost impossible .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The sheer size of the poultry population, the fact that it is normal for some poultry to die on farms, and that 70\% of a poultry population is being kept in the backyard are factors that make infection controlalmost impossible .
Revised:  The sheer size of the poultry population, the fact that it is normal for some poultry to die on farms, and that 70\% of the poultry population as being kept in the backyard are factors that make infection controlalmost impossible .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The sheer size of the poultry population, the fact that it is normal for some poultry to die on farms, and that 70\% of a poultry population is being kept in the backyard are factors that make infection controlalmost impossible .
Revised:  The sheer size of the poultry population, the fact that it is normal for some poultry to die on farms, and that 70\% of a poultry population is being kept in backyards are factors complicating infection control .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The fact is that testing  is required to confirm H5N1 virus, and a positive test results had led to the killing of nearby flocks.
Revised:  The fact is that testing is required to confirm H5N1 virus, and positive test results had led to the killing of nearby flocks.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The fact is that testing  is required to confirm H5N1 virus, and a positive test results had led to the killing of nearby flocks.
Revised:  The fact is that testing is required to confirm H5N1 virus, and a positive test results lead to the killing of nearby flocks.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  As can be seen from this one case, many villagers, officials, and even governments all have reasons to downplay the number of cases.
Revised:  The incentive for many villagers, officials, and even governments all have reasons to downplay the number of cases.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: The deat of chickens, ducks and birds are common events for farmer.
Revised: The deaths of chickens, ducks and birds are common events for farmer.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The worse threat is that their flocks could be culled (killed) leaving them destitute."
Revised:  The worse threat is that their flocks could be killed, leaving them destitute."
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A trojan horse has already been found in the wild that utilizes one of the piracy software's functions.
Revised:  A trojan horse has already been found in the wild that utilizes one of the anti-piracy software's functions.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Red Wings defensemen Jiri Fischer suffered a seizure on the player's benchduring their game against the Nashville Predators Monday night.
Revised: Detroit Red Wings hockey defenseman Jiri Fischer was hospitalized Monday night after suffering a seizure while on the bench, according to a spokesman for the team. He is listed in stable condition.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:   As of Monday night, Fischer's condition was listed as stable   
Revised:  As of Monday night, Fischer's condition was listed as stable . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Detroit Red Wings hockey defenseman Jiri Fischer was hospitalized Monday night after suffering a seizure while on the bench , according to a spokesman for the team .
Revised: Detroit Red Wings hockey defenseman Jiri Fischer was hospitalized Monday night after suffering a seizure while on the bench during a game in Detroit .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Late in the first period in a game against the Nashville Predators, Fischer , a defenseman for the team, collapsed on the bench.
Revised:  Late in the first period in a game against the Nashville Predators, Fischer collapsed on the bench.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  According to team coach Mike Babcock, Fischer suffered a seizure, and went into cardiac arrest.
Revised:  According to Red Wing coach Mike Babcock, Fischer suffered a seizure, and went into cardiac arrest.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Detroit Red Wings hockey defenseman Jiri Fischer was hospitalized Monday night after suffering a seizure while on the bench during a game in Detroit.
Revised: Detroit Red Wings defenseman Jiri Fischer was hospitalized Monday night after suffering a seizure while on the bench during a game in Detroit.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Detroit Red Wings defenseman Jiri Fischer was hospitalized Monday night after suffering a seizure while on the bench during a game in Detroit.
Revised: Detroit Red Wings defenseman Jiri Fischer was hospitalized Monday night after suffering a seizure while on the bench during an ice hockey game in Detroit.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Michael Scanlon, former aid to Tom DeLay and partner of the influential lobbyist Jack Abramoff  pleaded guilty yesterday to conspiracy to bribe a congressman and other pulic staffers.
Revised: Michael Scanlon, former partner of the influential lobbyist Jack Abramoff pleaded guilty yesterday to conspiracy to bribe a congressman and other pulic staffers.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Michael Scanlon, former aid to Tom DeLay and partner of the influential lobbyist Jack Abramoff  pleaded guilty yesterday to conspiracy to bribe a congressman and other pulic staffers.
Revised: Michael Scanlon, former aid to Tom DeLay and partner of the influential lobbyist Jack Abramoff , pleaded guilty yesterday to conspiracy to bribe a congressman and other pulic staffers.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Michael Scanlon, former aid to Tom DeLay and partner of the influential lobbyist Jack Abramoff  pleaded guilty yesterday to conspiracy to bribe a congressman and other pulic staffers.
Revised: Michael Scanlon, former aid to Tom DeLay and partner of the influential lobbyist Jack Abramoff pleaded guilty yesterday to conspiracy to bribe congressmen and other pulic staffers.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:   The members of congress involved in the corruption charges have not yet been named by the prosecutors, but Representative Bob Ney of Ohio has acknoledged that he is  "Representative No. 1" named in the court papers.
Revised:  The members of congress involved in the corruption charges have not yet been named by the prosecutors, but Representative Bob Ney of Ohio has acknoledged that he is the "Representative No. 1" named in the court papers.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The proscecution alleges that Representative No. 1 accepted gifts, including a gold trip to a luxury resort in Scottland and regular meals in an upscale D.C. restaurant, "in exchange for a series of official acts and influence.   
Revised:  The proscecution alleges that Representative No. 1 accepted gifts, including a golf trip to a luxury resort in Scottland and regular meals in an upscale D.C. restaurant, "in exchange for a series of official acts and influence. 
Edit intent: fluency