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Original: File:Hagia Sophia B12-40.jpg|140px|Hagia Sophia]]Istanbul, Turkey's and Europe's largest city, named European Capital of Culture for 2010  with spectacular fireworks displays, light shows, cultural performances and concerts which were arranged at seven locations across the city, symbolising the seven hills on which ancient Istanbul was built.
Revised: File:Hagia Sophia B12-40.jpg|140px|Hagia Sophia]]Istanbul, named European Capital of Culture for 2010 with spectacular fireworks displays, light shows, cultural performances and concerts which were arranged at seven locations across the city, symbolising the seven hills on which ancient Istanbul was built.
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Original: File:Hagia Sophia B12-40.jpg|140px|Hagia Sophia]]Istanbul, Turkey's and Europe's largest city, named European Capital of Culture for 2010  with spectacular fireworks displays, light shows, cultural performances and concerts which were arranged at seven locations across the city, symbolising the seven hills on which ancient Istanbul was built.
Revised: File:Hagia Sophia B12-40.jpg|140px|Hagia Sophia]]Istanbul, Turkey's and Europe's largest city, named European Capital of Culture for 2010 celebrated with spectacular fireworks displays, light shows, cultural performances and concerts which were arranged at seven locations across the city, symbolising the seven hills on which ancient Istanbul was built.
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Original: File:Hagia Sophia B12-40.jpg|140px|Hagia Sophia]]Istanbul, named European Capital of Culture for 2010  celebrated with spectacular fireworks displays, light shows, cultural performances and concerts which were arranged at seven locations across the city, symbolising the seven hills on which ancient Istanbul was built.
Revised: File:Hagia Sophia B12-40.jpg|140px|Hagia Sophia]]Istanbul, named European Capital of Culture for 2010 , celebrated with spectacular fireworks displays, light shows, cultural performances and concerts which were arranged at seven locations across the city, symbolising the seven hills on which ancient Istanbul was built.
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Original: File:Hagia Sophia B12-40.jpg|140px|Hagia Sophia]]Istanbul, named European Capital of Culture for 2010  celebrated with spectacular fireworks displays, light shows, cultural performances and concerts which were arranged at seven locations across the city, symbolising the seven hills on which ancient Istanbul was built.
Revised: File:Hagia Sophia B12-40.jpg|140px|Hagia Sophia]]Istanbul, named European Capital of Culture for 2010 celebrated with spectacular fireworks displays, light shows, cultural performances , and concerts, which were arranged at seven locations across the city, symbolising the seven hills on which ancient Istanbul was built.
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Original:  The European Union chose Istanbul, Turkey's and Europe's largest city, as one of the three European Capitals of Culture for 2010 by in 2006, along with Pécs in Hungary, and Essen in Germany.
Revised:  The European Union chose Istanbul, Turkey's and Europe's largest city, as one of the three European Capitals of Culture for 2010 in 2006, along with Pécs in Hungary, and Essen in Germany.
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Original: Political leaders think that the title has significance for Turkey, which is negotiating with the European Union.
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Original: British police have arrested several people in Yorkshire in connection with the London terror attacks.
Revised: British police have made arrests in Yorkshire in connection with the London terror attacks.
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Original: The raids, that started at 5:30 UTC, have caused problems in Leeds.
Revised: The raids, which started at 5:30 UTC, have caused problems in Leeds.
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Original: The school continued to use the facility, colloquially referred to as the the "Old Gym" or the "Small Gym", until the end of the 1994 season, when a newer athletic center was built on campus.
Revised: The school continued to use the facility, colloquially referred to as the "Old Gym" or the "Small Gym", until the end of the 1994 season, when a newer athletic center was built on campus.
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Original:  It remains, to date, the deadliest fighting between Christian and Muslim gangs in the country  
Revised:  It remains, to date, the deadliest fighting between Christian and Muslim gangs in the country . 
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Original: University has defeated Caloundra in their round 11 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match at the University of the Sunshine Coast in Sippy Downs, Australia . Caloundra went 3—0 up at the five minute mark after being awarded a penalty due to University playing the ball in the ruck .
Revised: has defeated in their round 11 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match at the University of the Sunshine Coast in Sippy Downs, Australia . Caloundra went 3—0 up at the five minute mark after being awarded a penalty due to University playing the ball in the ruck .
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Original: University has defeated Caloundra in their round 11 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match at the University of the Sunshine Coast in Sippy Downs, Australia . Caloundra went 3—0 up at the five minute mark after being awarded a penalty due to University playing the ball in the ruck .
Revised: University has defeated Caloundra in their round 11 match at the University of the Sunshine Coast in Sippy Downs, Australia . Caloundra went 3—0 up at the five minute mark after being awarded a penalty due to University playing the ball in the ruck .
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Original: University has defeated Caloundra in their round 11 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match at the University of the Sunshine Coast in Sippy Downs, Australia . Caloundra went 3—0 up at the five minute mark after being awarded a penalty due to University playing the ball in the ruck .
Revised: University has defeated Caloundra in their round 11 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match at the in , . Caloundra went 3—0 up at the five minute mark after being awarded a penalty due to University playing the ball in the ruck .
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Original: University has defeated Caloundra in their round 11 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match at the University of the Sunshine Coast in Sippy Downs, Australia . Caloundra went 3—0 up at the five minute mark after being awarded a penalty due to University playing the ball in the ruck .
Revised: University has defeated Caloundra in their round 11 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match at the University of the Sunshine Coast in Sippy Downs, Australia . Caloundra went 3—0 up at the five minute mark after being awarded a penalty due to University playing the ball in the .
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Original:  Caloundra retook the lead five minutes later through another penalty goal . 6—5 Caloundra.
Revised:  Caloundra retook the lead five minutes later through another . 6—5 Caloundra.
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Original:  University hit back right off the resulting kickoff scoring their second try , which they converted.
Revised:  University hit back right off the resulting kickoff scoring their second , which they converted.
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Original:  In the other A-grade game, Noosa defeated Maroochydore 24 mdash10
Revised:  In the other A-grade game, Noosa defeated Maroochydore 24 —10
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Original: The hosts went two points in front at twenty seven minutes scoring a try off the back of a rolling mall . 5–3 University.
Revised: The hosts went two points in front at twenty seven minutes scoring a try off the back of a . 5–3 University.
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Original: The game was held up briefly by back to back injury stoppages at about the fifteen minute mark.
Revised: The game was held up briefly by back-to-back injury stoppages at about the fifteen minute mark.
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Original: University would deny Caloundra a bonus point five minutes from full time slotting the matches final penalty goal.
Revised: University would deny Caloundra a bonus point five minutes from full time , slotting the match's final penalty goal.
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Original: University would deny Caloundra a bonus point five minutes from full time, slotting the match's final penalty goal  .
Revised: University slotting the match's final penalty goal .
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Original: University would deny Caloundra a bonus point five minutes from full time, slotting the match's final penalty goal  .
Revised: University would deny Caloundra a bonus point five minutes from full time, slotting the match's final penalty goal five minutes before full time .
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Original: University slotting the match's final penalty goal  five minutes before full time.
Revised: University slotted the match's final penalty goal five minutes before full time.
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Original: University slotting the match's final penalty goal  five minutes before full time.
Revised: University slotting the match's final penalty goal around five minutes before full time.
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Original:  30 other were injured, 2 of them seriously.
Revised:  24 others were injured, 2 of them seriously.
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Original:  Reuters reports that the Islamic Jihad has claimed responsibility for the attack  .
Revised:  The Islamic Jihad has claimed responsibility for the attack .
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Original:  The Palestinian Authority  condemmed the attacks.
Revised:  The Palestinian Authority (PA) condemmed the attacks.
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Original:  PA Offical  Rajoub called them "hurtful to our cause" and chief negotiator Saeb Erakat said that "those who carried out this attack want to sabotage the efforts being exerted to have a smooth and peaceful disengagement from Gaza and a revival of the peace process"  
Revised:  PA Offical Rajoub called them "hurtful to our cause" and chief negotiator Saeb Erakat said that "those who carried out this attack want to sabotage the efforts being exerted to have a smooth and peaceful disengagement from Gaza and a revival of the peace process" . 
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Original: At least 3 people were killed today at a presumed suicide bombing on a shopping center in Netanya.
Revised: Three people were killed today at a presumed suicide bombing on a shopping center in Netanya.
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Original: At least 3 people were killed today at a presumed suicide bombing on a shopping center in Netanya.
Revised: At least 3 people were killed today at a suicide bombing near a shopping center in Netanya.
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Original:  24 others were injured, 6 of them seriously.
Revised:  90 others were injured, 6 of them seriously.
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Original:  The Islamic Jihad has claimed responsibility for the attack in an phone call to Reuters' Tulkarem office .
Revised:  The Islamic Jihad has claimed responsibility for the attack in a phone call to Reuters' Tulkarem office .
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Original:  In light of the bombing, Israeli defence minister, Shaul Mofaz, cancelled a meeting with the Palestinian minister for civil affairs, Mohammed Dahlan, set for this evening to coordinate various issues regarding Israel's withdrawal from the Gaza Strip  
Revised:  In light of the bombing, Israeli defence minister, Shaul Mofaz, cancelled a meeting with the Palestinian minister for civil affairs, Mohammed Dahlan, set for this evening to coordinate various issues regarding Israel's withdrawal from the Gaza Strip . 
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Original:  The Islamic Jihad has claimed responsibility for the attack in a phone call to Reuters' Tulkarem office and identified the terrorist bomber as Ahmad Abu-Halil of Tulkarem.
Revised:  Islamic Jihad has claimed responsibility for the attack in a phone call to Reuters' Tulkarem office and identified the terrorist bomber as Ahmad Abu-Halil of Tulkarem.
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Original:  The Islamic Jihad has claimed responsibility for the attack in a phone call to Reuters' Tulkarem office and identified the terrorist bomber as Ahmad Abu-Halil of Tulkarem.
Revised:  The Islamic Jihad has claimed responsibility for the attack in a phone call to Reuters' Tulkarem office and identified the bomber as Ahmad Abu-Halil of Tulkarem.
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Original:  At about 6:35 PM local time (UTC +3), Abu-Halil detonated himself on a crosswalk, after approaching a group of four young women, french tourists according to some of the reports, who were crossing the road.
Revised:  At about 6:35 PM local time (UTC +3), Abu-Halil detonated himself on a crosswalk, after approaching a group of four young women, French tourists according to some of the reports, who were crossing the road.
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Original:  Local PD said that the terrorist carried around 10Kg of explosives, as well as nails and metal pellets, on an explosive belt that was strapped to his body.
Revised:  Local police said that the terrorist carried around 10Kg of explosives, as well as nails and metal pellets, on an explosive belt that was strapped to his body.
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Original:  Local PD said that the terrorist carried around 10Kg of explosives, as well as nails and metal pellets, on an explosive belt that was strapped to his body.
Revised:  Local PD said that the bomber carried around 10Kg of explosives, as well as nails and metal pellets, on an explosive belt that was strapped to his body.
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Original:  The Palestinian Authority (PA) condemmed the attack.
Revised:  The Palestinian Authority (PA) condemned the attack.
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Original:  This was the third terrorist attack in Israel in one day.
Revised:  This was the third attack in Israel in one day.
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Original:  Minutes before the attack in Netanya there was another attack attempt when a terrorist drove a stolen truck loaded with explosives into a civilian settlment of Shavey Shomron in Samaria, but he detonated the vehicle without harm to anyone but himself.
Revised:  Minutes before the attack in Netanya there was another attack attempt when a terrorist drove a stolen truck loaded with explosives into a civilian settlement of Shavey Shomron in Samaria, but he detonated the vehicle without harm to anyone but himself.
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Original: The "War on Drugs" waged by the United States has been criticized in a report released by the Washington D.C. -based human rights group Washington Office on Latin America.
Revised: The "War on Drugs" waged by the United States has been criticized in a report released by the Washington D.C. -left wing based human rights group Washington Office on Latin America.
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Original:  The   incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko has been eliminated from the election  
Revised:  The incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko have been eliminated from the election 
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Original:  The   incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko has been eliminated from the election  
Revised:  The incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko has been eliminated from the election . 
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Original:  18 other candidates, including with incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko  have been eliminated from the election.
Revised:  Eighteen other candidates, including with incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko have been eliminated from the election.
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Original:  18 other candidates, including with incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko  have been eliminated from the election.
Revised:  18 other candidates, including incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko have been eliminated from the election.
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Original:  18 other candidates, including with incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko  have been eliminated from the election.
Revised:  18 other candidates, including with incumbent president Viktor Yushchenko , have been eliminated from the election.
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Original:  President Yushchenko said that "Ukraine once again will demonstrate that it is a European democratic country, that it is a free nation, free people and free election ,"
Revised:  President Yushchenko said that "Ukraine once again will demonstrate that it is a European democratic country, that it is a free nation, free people and free election .
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Original: A map of turnout in the general election The 2010 Ukrainian presidential election will go into a runoff vote as no candidate has 50\% of the popular vote.
Revised:  The 2010 Ukrainian presidential election will go into a runoff vote as no candidate has 50\% of the popular vote.
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Original: The Buderim Cricket Club in Queensland, Australia will field a side against local Politicians on Australia Day while filling half the team.
Revised: The Buderim Cricket Club in Queensland, Australia will field a side against local politicians on Australia Day while filling half the team.
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Original: The Buderim Cricket Club in Queensland, Australia will field a side against local politicians on Australia Day while filling half the team.
Revised: The Buderim Cricket Club in Queensland, Australia will field a side against local politicians on Australia Day while providing half the team.
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Original:  According to Cuba's Communist president, Fidel Castro, the death toll of the hurricane has gone from 10 deaths yesterday to 16 deaths today.
Revised:  According to Cuba's communist president, Fidel Castro, the death toll of the hurricane has gone from 10 deaths yesterday to 16 deaths today.
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Original:  He has also said that  aid from other countries that have similar trade embargos with Cuba and will only be accepted by nations that do not have such arrangements
Revised:  He has also said that about aid from other countries that have similar trade embargos with Cuba and will only be accepted by nations that do not have such arrangements
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Original:  He has also said that about aid from other countries that have similar trade embargos with Cubaand will only be accepted by nations that do not have such arrangements
Revised:  Some other nations have similar trade embargos with Cubaand will only be accepted by nations that do not have such arrangements
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Original:  He has also said that about aid from other countries that have similar trade embargos with Cubaand will only be accepted by nations that do not have such arrangements
Revised:  He has also said that about aid from other countries that have similar trade embargoes with Cuba; Castro has also said that aid will only be accepted by nations that do not have such arrangements
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Original:  He has also said that about aid from other countries that have similar trade embargos with Cubaand will only be accepted by nations that do not have such arrangements
Revised:  He has also said that about aid from other countries that have similar trade embargos with Cubaand will only be accepted from nations that do not have such arrangements
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Original: Live on Sunday  from the Beverly Hilton Hotel in Beverly Hills, California were the 67th Annual Golden Globe Awards hosted by English comedian Ricky Gervais.
Revised: Live on Sunday evening from the Beverly Hilton Hotel in Beverly Hills, California were the 67th Annual Golden Globe Awards hosted by English comedian Ricky Gervais.
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Original:  This annual ceremony—which is often considered a preview to the Academy Awards—is conducted by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association to recognize achievements by those within the both motion picture and televison industries internationally.
Revised:  This annual ceremony—which is often considered a preview of the Academy Awards—is conducted by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association to recognize achievements by those within the both motion picture and televison industries internationally.
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Original:  Following which Americn actor George Clooney announced officially his intention to plan a telethon that would air on NBC on January 22 to raise money for those affected by the quake.
Revised:  Following which Americn actor George Clooney officially announced his intention to plan a telethon that would air on NBC on January 22 to raise money for those affected by the quake.
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Original:  Following which Americn actor George Clooney announced officially his intention to plan a telethon that would air on NBC on January 22 to raise money for those affected by the quake.
Revised:  Following which Americn actor George Clooney announced officially his intention to coordinate telethon that would air on NBC on January 22 to raise money for those affected by the quake.
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Original: Live on Sunday evening from the Beverly Hilton Hotel in Beverly Hills, California were the 67th Annual Golden Globe Awards hosted by English comedian Ricky Gervais.
Revised: Live last Sunday evening from the Beverly Hilton Hotel in Beverly Hills, California were the 67th Annual Golden Globe Awards hosted by English comedian Ricky Gervais.
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Original: Live last Sunday evening from the Beverly Hilton Hotel in Beverly Hills, California were the 67th Annual Golden Globe Awards hosted by English comedian Ricky Gervais.
Revised: Last Sunday evening at the Beverly Hilton Hotel in Beverly Hills, California were the 67th Annual Golden Globe Awards hosted by English comedian Ricky Gervais.
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Original:  The choice of Gervais as host is said to be move to increase viewership which declined to 15 million viewers last year from 27 million in 2004.
Revised:  The choice of Gervais as host was a move to increase viewership which declined to 15 million viewers last year from 27 million in 2004.
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Original:  This annual ceremony —which is often considered a preview of the Academy Awards—is conducted by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association to recognize achievements by those within the both motion picture and televison industries internationally.
Revised:  This annual event —which is often considered a preview of the Academy Awards—is conducted by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association to recognize achievements by those within the both motion picture and televison industries internationally.
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Original:  For instance, some wore lapel ribbons in honor of the victims, while others noted how strange it was for them to be enjoying something like an award ceremony in the midst of such tradgedy.
Revised:  For instance, some wore lapel ribbons to honor of the victims, while others noted how strange it was for them to be enjoying something like an award ceremony in the midst of such tradgedy.
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Original:  On such incident was when Americn actress Meryl Streep got emotional when accepting her Best Actress award for her potrayal of chef Julia Child in  Julia & Julia, "I am really honestly conflicted about how to have my 'happy movie self' in the face of everything that I'm aware of in the real world."
Revised:  On incident of this was when Americn actress Meryl Streep got emotional when accepting her Best Actress award for her potrayal of chef Julia Child in Julia & Julia, "I am really honestly conflicted about how to have my 'happy movie self' in the face of everything that I'm aware of in the real world."
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Original:  On such incident was when Americn actress Meryl Streep got emotional when accepting her Best Actress award for her potrayal of chef Julia Child in  Julia & Julia, "I am really honestly conflicted about how to have my 'happy movie self' in the face of everything that I'm aware of in the real world."
Revised:  On such incident was when Americn actress Meryl Streep got emotional while accepting her Best Actress award for her potrayal of chef Julia Child in Julia & Julia, "I am really honestly conflicted about how to have my 'happy movie self' in the face of everything that I'm aware of in the real world."
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