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Original:  Systemic Vascular Resistance Index Systemic vascular resistance normalized for body surface area ICON Index of contractility.
Revised:  Systemic vascular resistance index Systemic vascular resistance normalized for body surface area ICON Index of contractility.
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Original:  Peak acceleration of blood flow in the aorta VIC Variation of ICON Thoracic Fluid Index The electrical conductivity of the chest cavity,
Revised:  Peak acceleration of blood flow in the aorta VIC Variation of ICON Thoracic fluid index The electrical conductivity of the chest cavity,
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Original:  which is primarily determined by the intravascular, intraalveolar, and interstitial fluids in the thorax Left Cardiac Work An indicator of the amount of work the left ventricle must perform to pump blood each minute Systolic Time Ratio The ratio of the electrical and mechanical systole Pre Ejection Period The time interval from the beginning of electrical stimulation of the ventricles to the opening of the aortic valve (electrical systole)
Revised:  which is primarily determined by the intravascular, intraalveolar, and interstitial fluids in the thorax Left cardiac work An indicator of the amount of work the left ventricle must perform to pump blood each minute Systolic Time Ratio The ratio of the electrical and mechanical systole Pre Ejection Period The time interval from the beginning of electrical stimulation of the ventricles to the opening of the aortic valve (electrical systole)
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Original:  which is primarily determined by the intravascular, intraalveolar, and interstitial fluids in the thorax Left Cardiac Work An indicator of the amount of work the left ventricle must perform to pump blood each minute Systolic Time Ratio The ratio of the electrical and mechanical systole Pre Ejection Period The time interval from the beginning of electrical stimulation of the ventricles to the opening of the aortic valve (electrical systole)
Revised:  which is primarily determined by the intravascular, intraalveolar, and interstitial fluids in the thorax Left Cardiac Work An indicator of the amount of work the left ventricle must perform to pump blood each minute Systolic time ratio The ratio of the electrical and mechanical systole Pre Ejection Period The time interval from the beginning of electrical stimulation of the ventricles to the opening of the aortic valve (electrical systole)
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Original:  which is primarily determined by the intravascular, intraalveolar, and interstitial fluids in the thorax Left Cardiac Work An indicator of the amount of work the left ventricle must perform to pump blood each minute Systolic Time Ratio The ratio of the electrical and mechanical systole Pre Ejection Period The time interval from the beginning of electrical stimulation of the ventricles to the opening of the aortic valve (electrical systole)
Revised:  which is primarily determined by the intravascular, intraalveolar, and interstitial fluids in the thorax Left Cardiac Work An indicator of the amount of work the left ventricle must perform to pump blood each minute Systolic Time Ratio The ratio of the electrical and mechanical systole Pre ejection period The time interval from the beginning of electrical stimulation of the ventricles to the opening of the aortic valve (electrical systole)
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Original:  Left Ventricular Ejection Time The time interval from the opening to the closing of the aortic valve (mechanical systole) Category:Hemodynamics Category:Cardiolo
Revised:  Left ventricular ejection time The time interval from the opening to the closing of the aortic valve (mechanical systole) Category:Hemodynamics Category:Cardiolo
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Original:  Left Ventricular Ejection Time The time interval from the opening to the closing of the aortic valve (mechanical systole) Category:Hemodynamics Category:Cardiolo
Revised:  Left Ventricular Ejection Time The time interval from the opening to the closing of the aortic valve (mechanical systole) Category:Cardiolo
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Original: 120px|A non-invasive cardiac output monitor which uses electrical cardiometry (Cardiotronic, Inc.) Electrical cardiometry is a method based on the model of Electrical Velocimetry, and non-invasively measures stroke volume (SV), cardiac output (CO), and other hemodynamic parameters through the use of 4 surface ECG electrodes.
Revised:  Electrical cardiometry is a method based on the model of Electrical Velocimetry, and non-invasively measures stroke volume (SV), cardiac output (CO), and other hemodynamic parameters through the use of 4 surface ECG electrodes.
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Original: Jack Webster Foundation In 1986, more than 1,000 people attended a salute to Webster upon his retirement.
Revised: Jack Webster Foundation In 1986, more than 1000 people attended a salute to Webster upon his retirement.
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Original:  Each year, journalists judged to have outstanding work receive a Jack Webster Award (known as a "Webster") - a glass statue and a cash prize that has become the hallmark of journalistic excellence in British Columbia.
Revised:  Each year, journalists judged to have outstanding work receive a Jack Webster Award (known as a "Webster") , a glass statue and a cash prize that has become the hallmark of journalistic excellence in British Columbia.
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Original:  The awards have grown from a single "Reporter of the Year" in 1987 to thirteen awards today for : best news, best feature and best community news reporting (print, radio  and TV awards in each of the three categories) as well as recognition for excellence in the categories of business reporting, science reporting, commentary, legal journalism, Chinese-language news, and the Bruce Hutchison Lifetime Achievement Award.
Revised:  The awards have grown from a single "Reporter of the Year" in 1987 to thirteen awards today for best news, best feature and best community news reporting (print, radio and TV awards in each of the three categories) as well as recognition for excellence in the categories of business reporting, science reporting, commentary, legal journalism, Chinese-language news, and the Bruce Hutchison Lifetime Achievement Award.
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Original:  The awards have grown from a single "Reporter of the Year" in 1987 to thirteen awards today for : best news, best feature and best community news reporting (print, radio  and TV awards in each of the three categories) as well as recognition for excellence in the categories of business reporting, science reporting, commentary, legal journalism, Chinese-language news, and the Bruce Hutchison Lifetime Achievement Award.
Revised:  The awards have grown from a single "Reporter of the Year" in 1987 to thirteen awards today for : best news, best feature and best community news reporting (print, radio , and TV awards in each of the three categories) as well as recognition for excellence in the categories of business reporting, science reporting, commentary, legal journalism, Chinese-language news, and the Bruce Hutchison Lifetime Achievement Award.
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Original: Life in the United Kingdom Webster was born in Glasgow, the son of a Clydeside ironturner.
Revised: Early life Webster was born in Glasgow, the son of a Clydeside ironturner.
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Original:  When World War II broke out, Webster joined the British Army and rose to the rank of Major , with most of his six years' service  in the Middle East.
Revised:  When World War II broke out, Webster joined the British Army and rose to the rank of major , with most of his six years' service in the Middle East.
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Original:  When World War II broke out, Webster joined the British Army and rose to the rank of Major , with most of his six years' service  in the Middle East.
Revised:  When World War II broke out, Webster joined the British Army and rose to the rank of Major , with most of his six years' service spent in the Middle East.
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Original: Career in Canada After the war 's end , Webster emigrated to Canada.
Revised: Career in Canada After the war , Webster emigrated to Canada.
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Original:  In 1953, he began to work on commercial radio in the talk radio format ( which had its origins in British Columbia before spreading to the US) . Webster made his mark broadcasting shorthand transcripts of testimony during a probe into corruption on Vancouver's police force.
Revised:  In 1953, he began to work on commercial radio in the talk radio format , which had its origins in British Columbia before spreading to the US) . Webster made his mark broadcasting shorthand transcripts of testimony during a probe into corruption on Vancouver's police force.
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Original:  In 1953, he began to work on commercial radio in the talk radio format ( which had its origins in British Columbia before spreading to the US) . Webster made his mark broadcasting shorthand transcripts of testimony during a probe into corruption on Vancouver's police force.
Revised:  In 1953, he began to work on commercial radio in the talk radio format ( which had its origins in British Columbia before it spread to the United States . Webster made his mark broadcasting shorthand transcripts of testimony during a probe into corruption on Vancouver's police force.
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Original:  Jack left CJOR and moved his show to CKNW. During the 1960s, he had 186,000 daily listeners and a $100,000 salary.
Revised:  He left CJOR and moved his show to CKNW. During the 1960s, he had 186,000 daily listeners and a $100,000 salary.
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Original:  Jack left CJOR and moved his show to CKNW. During the 1960s, he had 186,000 daily listeners and a $100,000 salary.
Revised:  Jack left CJOR and moved his show to CKNW. In the 1960s, he had 186,000 daily listeners and a $100,000 salary.
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Original:  His hour-long TV interview program Webster!, which was seen weekdays at 9 am on BCTV and then-sister CHEK-TV , and beginning in 1986, at 5pm proceeding the nightly news hour on BCTV, frequently dealt with British Columbia politics.
Revised:  His hour-long TV interview program Webster!, which was seen weekdays at 9 am on BCTV and then-sister CHEK-TV and from 1986, at 5pm proceeding the nightly news hour on BCTV, frequently dealt with British Columbia politics.
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Original: Mefia career After the war, Webster emigrated to Canada.
Revised: Media career After the war, Webster emigrated to Canada.
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Original:  His City Mike show on CJOR achieved some fame covering it .
Revised:  His City Mike show on CJOR achieved some fame covering the issue .
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Original: 1999 deaths Category:British Army personnel of World War II Category:Canadian columnists Category:Canadian political journalists Category:Canadian talk radio hosts Category:Canadian television talk show hosts Category:Journalists from British Columbia Category:Members of the Order of Canada Category:People from Glasgow Category:People from Vancouver Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Politics of British Columbia Category:Scottish emigrants to Canada Category:Vancouver Sun peop
Revised: 1999 deaths Category:British Army personnel of World War II Category:Canadian columnists Category:Canadian political journalists Category:Canadian talk radio hosts Category:Canadian television talk show hosts Category:Journalists from British Columbia Category:Members of the Order of Canada Category:People from Glasgow Category:People from Vancouver Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Politics of British Columbia Category:Scottish emigrants to Canada Category:Vancouver Sun people Category:British Army office
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Original: Robert Koch Woolf, formerly known as Robert Koch ( born Temple, Texas , 1923;
Revised: Robert Koch Woolf, formerly known as Robert Koch ( 1923, in Temple, Texas , 1923;
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Original:  died Montecito, California , 2004 ), was an American interior decorator noted for the Hollywood homes he created with architect John Elgin Woolf.
Revised:  died Montecito, California ), was an American interior decorator noted for the Hollywood homes he created with architect John Elgin Woolf.
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Original: 6 July 2005 incident [[File:Paul Martin October 2005.jpg|Poster in Montreal in opposition to Canada's involvement in the UN mission in Haiti under the government of Paul Martin in 2005]][[File:Riot PetionVille.jpg| 13KB| Chilean helicopter during the 2006 elections]] On 6 July 2005, MINUSTAH, led by Brazilian general Augusto Heleno carried out a raid in the Cité Soleil section of Port-au-Prince.
Revised: 6 July 2005 incident [[File:Paul Martin October 2005.jpg|Poster in Montreal in opposition to Canada's involvement in the UN mission in Haiti under the government of Paul Martin in 2005]][[File:Riot PetionVille.jpg| Chilean helicopter during the 2006 elections]] On 6 July 2005, MINUSTAH, led by Brazilian general Augusto Heleno carried out a raid in the Cité Soleil section of Port-au-Prince.
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Original:  [[File:Forças especiais, Comandos (26439780640).jpg|Brazilian Army snipers are positioned to defend UN base during combat with gangs in the Haitian capital Port Prince in 2011.]
Revised:  [[File:Forças especiais, Comandos (26439780640).jpg|Brazilian Army snipers are positioned to defend UN base during combat with gangs in the Haitian capital Port-au-Prince in 2011.]
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Original: On 13 April 2017, the United Nations Security Council announced that the mission will end in October 2017.
Revised: On 13 April 2017, the United Nations Security Council announced that the mission would end in October 2017.
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Original:  It is set to be replaced by a  follow-up mission : the United Nations Mission for Justice Support in Haiti (MINUJUSTH) , which is expected to have just under 1,300 personnel .
Revised:  It was replaced by a follow-up mission : the United Nations Mission for Justice Support in Haiti (MINUJUSTH) , which is expected to have just under 1,300 personnel .
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Original:  It is set to be replaced by a  follow-up mission : the United Nations Mission for Justice Support in Haiti (MINUJUSTH) , which is expected to have just under 1,300 personnel .
Revised:  It is set to be replaced by a follow-up mission : the United Nations Mission for Justice Support in Haiti (MINUJUSTH) .
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Original: Hasan, born in 625, was the second Shia Imam and he also assumed the role of caliph for several months after Ali's death.
Revised: Hasan, born in 625, is the second Shia Imam and he also assumed the role of caliph for several months after Ali's death.
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Original:  When Muhammad reported receiving a divine revelation, Ali was the first child to accept his message and first male to convert to Islam at the age of 12, dedicating his life to the cause of Islam.
Revised:  When Muhammad reported receiving a divine revelation, Ali was one of the first believers in Islam at the age of 12, dedicating his life to the cause of Islam.
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Original:  After Fatimah's death, he married Umamah  the daughter of Zainab the elder daughter of Muhammad, and had two sons with her: Hilal (also known as "Muhammad al-Awsat or Muhammad the Middle"), and 'Awn.
Revised:  After Fatimah's death, he married Umamah , the daughter of Zainab the elder daughter of Muhammad, and had two sons with her: Hilal (also known as "Muhammad al-Awsat or Muhammad the Middle"), and 'Awn.
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Original:  She has been romantically linked to South African actor and director Neil Sandilands.
Revised:  She has been romantically linked to actor and director Neil Sandilands.
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Original:  Career TerBlanche was crowned Miss Teen South Africa in 1991, and subsequently played Bienkie Naudé Hartman on the South African drama Egoli: Place of Gold from 1992 to 1995.
Revised:  Television TerBlanche was crowned Miss Teen South Africa in 1991, and subsequently played Bienkie Naudé Hartman on the South African drama Egoli: Place of Gold from 1992 to 1995.
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Original:  Sculpture was founded by David Furchgott.
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Original:  External links Online archive Category:Art   magazines Category: Sculpture Category:Magazines established in 19
Revised:  See also Online archive Category:Art magazines Category: Sculpture Category:Magazines established in 19
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Original:  External links Online archive Category:Art   magazines Category: Sculpture Category:Magazines established in 19
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Original:  Published in print form and digitally six times per year, Sculpture is the essential source of information, criticism, and dialogue on all forms of contemporary sculpture internationally.
Revised:  The magazine is published in print form and digitally six times per year, Sculpture is the essential source of information, criticism, and dialogue on all forms of contemporary sculpture internationally.
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Original:  Published in print form and digitally six times per year, Sculpture is the essential source of information, criticism, and dialogue on all forms of contemporary sculpture internationally.
Revised:  Published in print form and digitally six times per year, described as " the essential source of information, criticism, and dialogue on all forms of contemporary sculpture internationally.
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Original:  Published in print form and digitally six times per year, Sculpture is the essential source of information, criticism, and dialogue on all forms of contemporary sculpture internationally.
Revised:  Published in print form and digitally six times per year, Sculpture is the essential source of information, criticism, and dialogue on all forms of contemporary sculpture URL
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Original:  The magazine is published in print form and digitally six times per year, described as "the essential source of information, criticism, and dialogue on all forms of contemporary sculpture URL 
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Original:  New York: I. B. Tauris. pgs 27-29 ( ISBN 978-1-85043-459-7 ) Available at Google Books
Revised:  New York: I. B. Tauris. pgs 27-29 ( ) Available at Google Books
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Original:  Nearly US$150 million was contributed to the program, a majority of funds were paid by South Korea's primary benefactor , the United States, although even developing nations such as Mexico made contributions .
Revised:  Nearly US$150 million was contributed to the program, a majority of funds were paid by South Korea's primary benefactor .
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Original: 2016 deaths Category:Iranian Azerbaijani grand ayatollahs and clerics Category:Iranian heads of Judicial System Category:People from Ardabil Category:Chief Justices of Iran Category:Al-Moussawi family Category:People of the Iranian Revolution Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:Members of the Assembly of Experts Category:  Islamic Republican Party politicians Category:Council of the Islamic Revolution members Category:Members of the Assembly of Experts for Constituti
Revised: 2016 deaths Category:Iranian Azerbaijani grand ayatollahs and clerics Category:Iranian heads of Judicial System Category:People from Ardabil Category:Chief Justices of Iran Category:Al-Moussawi family Category:People of the Iranian Revolution Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:Members of the Assembly of Experts Category: Islamic Republican Party members Category:Council of the Islamic Revolution members Category:Members of the Assembly of Experts for Constituti
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Original: Recap On the August 10, 2005  results show, Casey was in the bottom three for the first time in the competition.
Revised: Recap On the August 10, 2005 , results show, Casey was in the bottom three for the first time in the competition.
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Original: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis without causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hypokalemia .
Revised: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis without causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hyperkalemia .
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Original: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis without causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hyperkalemia .
Revised: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis without causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hypokalemia .
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Original: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis without causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hypokalemia.
Revised: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis by causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hypokalemia.
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Original: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis by causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hypokalemia .
Revised: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis without causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hypokalemia .
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Original: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis by causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hypokalemia .
Revised: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis by causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hyperkalemia .
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Original: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis without causing potassium loss in the urine and leading to hyperkalemia.
Revised: Potassium-sparing diuretics refers to drugs that cause diuresis without causing potassium loss in the urine , though this can lead to hyperkalemia.
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Original: Brief Overview of the PSM The PSM is an entity that “actually exists, not only as a distinct theoretical entity but something that will be empirically discovered in the future- for instance, as a specific stage of the global neural dynamics in the human brain”.
Revised:  Overview of the PSM The PSM is an entity that “actually exists, not only as a distinct theoretical entity but something that will be empirically discovered in the future- for instance, as a specific stage of the global neural dynamics in the human brain”.
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Original:  The first is mineness, “ a higher order property of particular forms of phenomenal content, ” or the idea of ownership.
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Original:  The first is mineness, “ a higher order property of particular forms of phenomenal content, ” or the idea of ownership.
Revised:  The first is mineness, “ a higher order property of particular forms of phenomenal content, " or the idea of ownership.
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Original:  The third phenomenal property is selfhood, which is “ the phenomenal target property ” or the idea of the self over time.
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Original:  The third phenomenal property is selfhood, which is “ the phenomenal target property ” or the idea of the self over time.
Revised:  The third phenomenal property is selfhood, which is “ the phenomenal target property " or the idea of the self over time.
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Original:  We  are thus what Metzinger calls naïve realists, who believe we are perceiving reality directly when in actuality we are only perceiving representations of reality.
Revised:  We are thus what Metzinger calls naïve realists, who believe they are perceiving reality directly when in actuality we are only perceiving representations of reality.
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