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Original:  The AP also reports that prisoners are saying "freedom or death" and are holding a banner saying "Justice.   
Revised:  The AP also reports that prisoners are saying "freedom or death" and are holding a banner saying "Justice. " 
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Original: According to the Associated Press, at least 100 prisoners stormed the roof of the prison and are holding what looks to be 2 dead inmates ;
Revised: According to the Associated Press, at least 100 prisoners stormed the roof of the prison and are holding what appeared to be 2 dead inmates ;
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Original: According to the Associated Press, at least 100 prisoners stormed the roof of the prison and are holding what appeared to be 2 dead inmates.
Revised: According to the Associated Press, at least 100 prisoners stormed the roof of the prison and were seen holding what appeared to be 2 dead inmates.
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Original:  Prisoners were  heard chanting "freedom or death" and held a banner saying "Justice."
Revised:  Prisoners were also heard chanting "freedom or death" and held a banner saying "Justice."
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Original: Fernando Alonso became the first spaniard to win FIA Formula-1 Spanish Gran Prix.
Revised: Fernando Alonso became the first Spaniard to win FIA Formula-1 Spanish Gran Prix.
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Original:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher showed third result after the qualification on Saturday.
Revised:  Unlike the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher showed third result after the qualification on Saturday.
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Original:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher showed third result after the qualification on Saturday.
Revised:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher placed third after the qualification on Saturday.
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Original: Fernando Alonso became the first Spaniard to win  FIA Formula-1 Spanish Gran Prix.
Revised: Fernando Alonso became the first Spaniard to win the FIA Formula-1 Spanish Gran Prix.
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Original:  Unlike  the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher placed third after the qualification on Saturday.
Revised:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher placed third after the qualification on Saturday.
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Original:  Two Ferrari cars occupy the second row.
Revised:  Two Ferrari cars occupied the second row.
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Original:  In the race, which took place on a Barcelona, Montmello circuit de Catalunya, Schumacher strikes hard to overtake Renault drivers, but ended it with this goal half done.
Revised:  In the race, which took place on Barcelona, Montmello circuit de Catalunya, Schumacher strikes hard to overtake Renault drivers, but ended it with this goal half done.
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Original:  In the race, which took place on a Barcelona, Montmello circuit de Catalunya, Schumacher strikes hard to overtake Renault drivers, but ended it with this goal half done.
Revised:  In the race, which took place on a Barcelona, Montmello circuit de Catalunya, Schumacher struck hard to overtake Renault drivers, but ended it with this goal half done.
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Original:  In the race, which took place on a Barcelona, Montmello circuit de Catalunya, Schumacher strikes hard to overtake Renault drivers, but ended it with this goal half done.
Revised:  In the race, which took place on a Barcelona, Montmello circuit de Catalunya, Schumacher strikes hard to overtake Renault drivers, but finished with this goal half done.
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Original:  Unable to compete with Alonso's speed, he easily overtaked Fisico , after the first pit stop.
Revised:  Unable to compete with Alonso's speed, he easily overtook Fisico after the first pit stop.
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Original:  As said by the winner about his  speed, he "controlled the second part of the race" and slowed down because of the huge gap between him and his closest competitor, Michael Schumacher.
Revised:  As said by the winner about his own speed, he "controlled the second part of the race" and slowed down because of the huge gap between him and his closest competitor, Michael Schumacher.
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Original:  Though set up the fastest lap in the race, Felipe Massa this timehaven't had enough pace to overtake Fisicella,  completing the race on the fourth place.
Revised:  Although he set the fastest lap in the race, Felipe Massa this timehaven't had enough pace to overtake Fisicella, completing the race on the fourth place.
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Original:  Though set up the fastest lap in the race, Felipe Massa this timehaven't had enough pace to overtake Fisicella,  completing the race on the fourth place.
Revised:  Though set up the fastest lap in the race, this time, Felipe Massa did not have enough pace to overtake Fisicella, completing the race on the fourth place.
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Original:  Though set up the fastest lap in the race, Felipe Massa this timehaven't had enough pace to overtake Fisicella,  completing the race on the fourth place.
Revised:  Though set up the fastest lap in the race, Felipe Massa this timehaven't had enough pace to overtake Fisicella, thus completing the race on the fourth place.
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Original:  Kimi Räikkönen struggled not so much with the other drivers , as with his own car and finished fifth.
Revised:  Kimi Räikkönen did not struggle as much with the other drivers , as with his own car and finished fifth.
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Original:  Kimi Räikkönen struggled not so much with the other drivers , as with his own car and finished fifth.
Revised:  Kimi Räikkönen struggled not so much with the other drivers as he did with his own car and finished fifth.
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Original:  All the other competitors, except for the sixth  Jenson Button, finished with a gap more than a lap.
Revised:  All the other competitors, except for the sixth place Jenson Button, finished with a gap more than a lap.
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Original:  I refrain from making a direct endorsement of either as that smacks of the very party politics I have come to loath . Let them articulate their messages to the delegates and the delegates decide without the interference of one of the failed candidates, or the party machine, who should be their standard bearer.
Revised:  I refrain from making a direct endorsement of either as that smacks of the very party politics I have come to loathe . Let them articulate their messages to the delegates and the delegates decide without the interference of one of the failed candidates, or the party machine, who should be their standard bearer.
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Original: Top Americans Elect candidate announces '23' potential running mates Former Louisiana governor Buddy Roemer , the current leader in supporters for the presidential nomination, announced on 's in April that he has compiled a list of "23" potential running mates for his campaign.
Revised: Top Americans Elect candidate announces '23' potential running mates Former Louisiana governor , the current leader in supporters for the presidential nomination, announced on 's in April that he has compiled a list of "23" potential running mates for his campaign.
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Original:  According to American Elect rules, Roemer must select a running mate that is a political Independent or from the Democratic Party since Roemer has been associated with the Republican Party for most of his career.
Revised:  According to Americans Elect rules, Roemer must select a running mate that is a political Independent or from the Democratic Party since Roemer has been associated with the Republican Party for most of his career.
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Original:  With the withdrawal, the press began to identify Romney as the presumptive  nominee, though he had yet to secure enough delegates to clinch the nomination.
Revised:  With the withdrawal, the press began to identify Romney as the presumptive Republican Party nominee, though he had yet to secure enough delegates to clinch the nomination.
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Original:  announces congressional run In April, former ended his campaign for the 2012 presidential nomination of the  (LP), citing fundraising difficulties.
Revised:  announces congressional run In April, former ended his campaign for the 2012 presidential nomination of the Libertarian Party (LP), citing fundraising difficulties.
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Original:  Top Americans Elect candidate announces '23' potential running mates Former Louisiana governor  , the current leader in supporters for the  presidential nomination, announced on 's in April that he has compiled a list of "23" potential running mates for his campaign.
Revised:  Top Americans Elect candidate announces '23' potential running mates Former Louisiana governor , the current leader in supporters for the Americans Elect presidential nomination, announced on 's in April that he has compiled a list of "23" potential running mates for his campaign.
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Original: Michel Rocard MEP noted several "inelegancies" by the Commission in his speech against the directive, such as not taking into account any of the Parliament's substantive amendments in its recommendation to the Council.
Revised: MEP Michel Rocard noted several "inelegancies" by the Commission in his speech against the directive, such as not taking into account any of the Parliament's substantive amendments in its recommendation to the Council.
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Original:  19 MEPs voted in favour of re-starting negotiations, 2 against with one abstention .
Revised:  19 MEPs voted in favour of re-starting negotiations, 2 against with one abstention 
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Europe Category:European Union Category:Science and technology Category:Computing Category:Economy and business de:Europaparlament fordert Neufassung der Software-Patentrichtlinie pl:Parlament Europejski odrzuca paten
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Europe Category:European Union Category:Science and technology Category:Computing Category:Economy and business de:Europaparlament fordert Neufassung der Software-Patentrichtlinie pl:Parlament Europejski odrzuca paten
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Original:  115 attacks against personnel and police departments have been recorded.
Revised:  180 attacks against personnel and police departments have been recorded.
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Original:  They have closed streets near police departments, and armed policemen are patrolling regions of the city of São Paulo
Revised:  They have closed streets near police departments, and armed policemen are patrolling regions of the city 
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Original:  PCC (Primeiro Comando da Capital, Portuguese for First Command of the Capital City ) criminals have been backing several attacks against security forces in the state of São Paulo, Brazil.
Revised:  PCC (Primeiro Comando da Capital, Portuguese for First Command of the Capital City ) criminals have been backing several attacks against security forces in the state of São Paulo, Brazil.
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Original:  margin:5px;"> [[Image:Darfur refugees.jpg|200px| frame| Refugees at a post of Médecins Sans Frontières]] A report released by the United Nations last week said that there is no genocide in Sudan's western region of Darfur.
Revised:  margin:5px;"> [[Image:Darfur refugees.jpg|200px| Refugees at a post of Médecins Sans Frontières]] A report released by the United Nations last week said that there is no genocide in Sudan's western region of Darfur.
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Original:  Ibrahim was also charged with the same offenses including the murder of 148 Dujail Shiites in 1982, who were sentenced to death for an asassination attempt on the former Iraqi President.
Revised:  Ibrahim was also charged with the same offenses including the murder of 148 Dujail Shiites in 1982, who were sentenced to death for an assassination attempt on the former Iraqi President.
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Original: Seven other former members of Hussein's regime are also on trial, facing the same charges.
Revised: Seven other former members of Hussein's government are also on trial, facing the same charges.
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Original:  As a result for your orders to use force against Dujail residents, nine people were killed in the first two days ... and 399 others were arrested," said Rahman.
Revised:  As a result of your orders to use force against Dujail residents, nine people were killed in the first two days ... and 399 others were arrested," said Rahman.
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Original:  Ibrahim was also charged with the same offenses including the murder of 148 Dujail Shiites in 1982, who were sentenced to death for an assassination attempt on the former Iraqi President.
Revised:  Ibrahim was also charged with the same offences including the murder of 148 Dujail Shiites in 1982, who were sentenced to death for an assassination attempt on the former Iraqi President.
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Original:  When the charges are read, it means it's time for the defense team to present their case.
Revised:  When the charges are read, it means it's time for the defence team to present their case.
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Original:  Ibrahim was also charged with the same offences including the murder of 148 Dujail Shiites in 1982, who were sentenced to death for an assassination attempt on the former Iraqi President.
Revised:  Ibrahim was also charged with the same offenses including the murder of 148 Dujail Shiites in 1982, who were sentenced to death for an assassination attempt on the former Iraqi President.
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Original:  When the charges are read, it means it's time for the defence team to present their case.
Revised:  When the charges are read, it means it's time for the defense team to present their case.
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Original: A spectacular fiesta took place in Karaiskaki Stadium in Piraeus, Greece, when 30,000 supporters of Olympiacos FC along with players and team administration  celebrated their 34th Soccer Championship . Guest of honour was the retired Argentinian superstar Diego Armando Maradona, who personally delivered the Cup of the Champion to the players of Olympiacos and went on stage, in the centre of the stadium, where he shouted "Viva Grecia, viva Olympiacos!".
Revised: A spectacular fiesta took place in Karaiskaki Stadium in Piraeus, Greece, when 30,000 supporters of Olympiacos F.C., along with players and team administration celebrated their 34th Soccer Championship . Guest of honour was the retired Argentinian superstar Diego Armando Maradona, who personally delivered the Cup of the Champion to the players of Olympiacos and went on stage, in the centre of the stadium, where he shouted "Viva Grecia, viva Olympiacos!".
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Original: A spectacular fiesta took place in Karaiskaki Stadium in Piraeus, Greece, when 30,000 supporters of Olympiacos FC along with players and team administration  celebrated their 34th Soccer Championship . Guest of honour was the retired Argentinian superstar Diego Armando Maradona, who personally delivered the Cup of the Champion to the players of Olympiacos and went on stage, in the centre of the stadium, where he shouted "Viva Grecia, viva Olympiacos!".
Revised: A spectacular fiesta took place in Karaiskaki Stadium in Piraeus, Greece, when 30,000 supporters of Olympiacos FC along with players and team administration , celebrated their 34th Soccer Championship . Guest of honour was the retired Argentinian superstar Diego Armando Maradona, who personally delivered the Cup of the Champion to the players of Olympiacos and went on stage, in the centre of the stadium, where he shouted "Viva Grecia, viva Olympiacos!".
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Original: A spectacular fiesta took place in Karaiskaki Stadium in Piraeus, Greece, when 30,000 supporters of Olympiacos FC along with players and team administration  celebrated their 34th Soccer Championship . Guest of honour was the retired Argentinian superstar Diego Armando Maradona, who personally delivered the Cup of the Champion to the players of Olympiacos and went on stage, in the centre of the stadium, where he shouted "Viva Grecia, viva Olympiacos!".
Revised: A spectacular fiesta took place in Karaiskaki Stadium in Piraeus, Greece, when 30,000 supporters of Olympiacos FC along with players and team administration celebrated their 34th Soccer Championship . Guest of honour was the retired Argentinian superstar Diego Armando Maradona, who personally delivered the Cup of the Champion to the players of Olympiacos and went on stage, in the centre of the stadium, and shouted "Viva Grecia, viva Olympiacos!".
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Original:  Diego Maradona had also the opportunity to deliver a short soccer technique show along with Olympiacos' brazilian superstar, Rivaldo, in the field of Karaiskaki , something which caused delirium within the fans .
Revised:  Diego Maradona had also the opportunity to deliver a short skills demonstration with Olympiacos' brazilian superstar, Rivaldo, in the field of Karaiskaki , something which caused delirium within the fans .
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Original:  Diego Maradona had also the opportunity to deliver a short soccer technique show along with Olympiacos' brazilian superstar, Rivaldo, in the field of Karaiskaki , something which caused delirium within the fans .
Revised:  Diego Maradona had also the opportunity to deliver a short soccer technique show along with Olympiacos' Brazilian superstar, Rivaldo, in the field of Karaiskaki , something which caused delirium within the fans .
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Original:  Diego Maradona had also the opportunity to deliver a short soccer technique show along with Olympiacos' brazilian superstar, Rivaldo, in the field of Karaiskaki , something which caused delirium within the fans .
Revised:  Diego Maradona had also the opportunity to deliver a short soccer technique show along with Olympiacos' brazilian superstar, Rivaldo, on the Karaiskaki pitch - something which caused delirium within the fans .
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Original:  The soccer season ended with a 0-0 scoreline between Olympiacos and Ionikos, which however had no importance as long as Olympiacos was already on the top of the Greek Championship , capturing the first place.
Revised:  The soccer season ended with a 0-0 draw against Ionikos, but this result was irrelevant as the club was already secure at the top of the Greek Championship , capturing the first place.
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Original:  Olympiacos FC accomplished the "double " in Greek Soccer , winning both the Championship and the Cup competitions and as  a result of this it will play , next season, in one of Champions League clubs
Revised:  Olympiacos FC accomplished the "double " in Greek Soccer , winning both the Championship and the Cup competition. a result of this it will play , next season, in one of Champions League clubs
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Original:  Olympiacos FC accomplished the "double " in Greek Soccer , winning both the Championship and the Cup competitions and as  a result of this it will play , next season, in one of Champions League clubs
Revised:  Olympiacos FC accomplished the "double " in Greek Soccer , winning both the Championship and the Cup competitions and as As a result of this it will play , next season, in one of Champions League clubs
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Original:  All of the good events that are going on in the continent, is not of interest in the media.
Revised:  All of the good events that are going on around the continent, is not of interest in the media.
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Original:  The ninety year old victim was found dead at his home April First with serious head injuries.
Revised:  The ninety year old victim was found dead at his home April first with serious head injuries.
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Original:  Because this is a continent with over one billion people.
Revised:  Because this is a continent of over one billion people.
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Original:  This is a countintent that is a mixture of all races -- all of the complexities that you find elsewhere.
Revised:  This is a continent that is a mixture of all races -- all of the complexities that you find elsewhere.
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Original:  We have all of these magnificent universities, but what do they need -- looking at the entire contintent and trying to understand the complexity in one semester?
Revised:  We have all of these magnificent universities, but what do they need -- looking at the entire continent and trying to understand the complexity in one semester?
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Original:  But you still have situations like Brazzaville -- there  not much media coverage about it.
Revised:  But you still have situations like Brazzaville -- there 's not much media coverage about it.
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Original:  All of the good events that are going on around the continent, is not of interest in the media.
Revised:  All of the good events that are going on around the continent, are often not of interest in the media.
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Original: Image: Libyseal.gif | frame | National seal of Libya]] Flag of the United States.
Revised: Image: Libyseal.gif | frame | Flag of Libya]] Flag of the United States.
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Original:  In 2003 Libya announced efforts to dismantle military programs to develop weapons of mass destruction as well, which led directly to diplomatic negotiations with the U.S. and the opening of a diplomatic liason office in Tripoli in 2004
Revised:  In 2003 Libya announced efforts to dismantle military programs to develop weapons of mass destruction as well, which led directly to diplomatic negotiations with the U.S. and the opening of a diplomatic liason office in Tripoli in 2004.
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Original:  Image:Libyseal.gif|190|National seal of Libya Diplomatic ties were strained between the countries following the rise to power of Libyan leader Muammar al-Gaddafi in 1969, and U.S. economic sanctions against the country beginning in the 1970s.
Revised:  Diplomatic ties were strained between the countries following the rise to power of Libyan leader Muammar al-Gaddafi in 1969, and U.S. economic sanctions against the country beginning in the 1970s.
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Original: "We are taking these actions in recognition of Libya's continued commitment to its renunciation of terrorism and the excellent cooperation Libya has provided to the United States and other members of the international community in response to common global threats faced by the civilized world since September 11, 2001," said Condolezza Rice, the United State's Secretatry of State.
Revised: "We are taking these actions in recognition of Libya's continued commitment to its renunciation of terrorism and the excellent cooperation Libya has provided to the United States and other members of the international community in response to common global threats faced by the civilized world since September 11, 2001," said Condoleezza Rice, the United State's Secretatry of State.
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Original: "We are taking these actions in recognition of Libya's continued commitment to its renunciation of terrorism and the excellent cooperation Libya has provided to the United States and other members of the international community in response to common global threats faced by the civilized world since September 11, 2001," said Condolezza Rice, the United State's Secretatry of State.
Revised: "We are taking these actions in recognition of Libya's continued commitment to its renunciation of terrorism and the excellent cooperation Libya has provided to the United States and other members of the international community in response to common global threats faced by the civilized world since September 11, 2001," said Condolezza Rice, the United States Secretary of State.
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Original:  The UN removed international economic sanctions in 1999, following Libya's acceptance of UN Security Counsel Resolutions regarding Pan Am Flight 103.
Revised:  The UN removed international economic sanctions in 1999, following Libya's acceptance of UN Security Council Resolutions regarding Pan Am Flight 103.
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