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Original: right The network run by the file sharing program WinMX  as well as the WinMX homepage  has become the first casualty of an Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) crackdown on file-sharing programs.
Revised: right The network run by the file sharing program WinMX , as well as the WinMX homepage has become the first casualty of an Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) crackdown on file-sharing programs.
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Original: right The network run by the file sharing program WinMX  as well as the WinMX homepage  has become the first casualty of an Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) crackdown on file-sharing programs.
Revised: right The network run by the file sharing program WinMX as well as the WinMX homepage , has become the first casualty of an Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) crackdown on file-sharing programs.
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Original: right The network run by the file sharing program WinMX  as well as the WinMX homepage  has become the first casualty of an Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) crackdown on file-sharing programs.
Revised: right The network run by the file sharing program WinMX as well as the WinMX homepage has become the first casualty of a Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA) crackdown on file-sharing programs.
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Original:  In mid-September, the RIAA sent Frontcode Technologies a cease and desist letter asking them to implement filters to make it impossible for users to download copyrighted material from their site, or shut down.
Revised:  In mid-September, the RIAA sent Frontcode Technologies a letter asking them to implement filters to make it impossible for users to download copyrighted material from their site, or shut down.
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Original:  Earlier this year, the U.S. Supreme Court decided that maintainers of a network can be held responsible to the content shared on P2P networks
Revised:  Earlier this year, the U.S. Supreme Court decided that maintainers of a network can be held responsible to the content shared on networks
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Original:  He was attending an European Union-African summit at the time.
Revised:  He was attending a European Union-African summit at the time.
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Original:  It has been announced that the President will miss tomorrows European security meeting in Kazakhstan
Revised:  It has been announced that the President will miss tomorrow's European security meeting in Kazakhstan
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Original: The director of the second Star Wars movie , The Empire Strikes Back, Irvin Kershner died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87, following a 3½ year battle with Lung Cancer.
Revised: Irvin Kershner, director of second Star Wars movie , The Empire Strikes Back, Irvin Kershner died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87, following a 3½ year battle with Lung Cancer.
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Original: The director of the second Star Wars movie , The Empire Strikes Back, Irvin Kershner died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87, following a 3½ year battle with Lung Cancer.
Revised: The director of the second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, Irvin Kershner died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87, following a 3½ year battle with Lung Cancer.
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Original: The director of the second Star Wars movie , The Empire Strikes Back, Irvin Kershner died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87, following a 3½ year battle with Lung Cancer.
Revised: The director of the second Star Wars movie , The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87, following a 3½ year battle with Lung Cancer.
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Original:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese, in which he played Zebedee, and also starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground Category:Culture and entertainment Category:United States Category:Obituari
Revised:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese, in which he played Zebedee, and also starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Category:Culture and entertainment Category:United States Category:Obituari
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Original:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese, in which he played Zebedee, and also starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground Category:Culture and entertainment Category:United States Category:Obituari
Revised:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese, in which he played Zebedee, and also starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground Groun
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Original: Irvin Kershner, director of second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87, following a 3 year battle with Lung Cancer.
Revised: Irvin Kershner, director of second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87, following a three-and-a-half year battle with Lung Cancer.
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Original:  The announcement of his death was made by his goddaughter , Adriana Santini, on Monday.
Revised:  The announcement of his death was made by his god-daughter , Adriana Santini, on Monday.
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Original:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese, in which he played Zebedee, and also starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Groun
Revised:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese, in which he played Zebedee, and also starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground
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Original: Irvin Kershner, director of  second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87 , following a three-and-a-half year battle with Lung Cancer .
Revised: Irvin Kershner, director of the second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87 , following a three-and-a-half year battle with Lung Cancer .
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Original: Irvin Kershner, director of  second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87 , following a three-and-a-half year battle with Lung Cancer .
Revised: Irvin Kershner, director of second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California aged 87 , following a three-and-a-half year battle with Lung Cancer .
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Original: Irvin Kershner, director of  second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87 , following a three-and-a-half year battle with Lung Cancer .
Revised: Irvin Kershner, director of second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87 ; this followed a three-and-a-half year battle with Lung Cancer .
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Original: Irvin Kershner, director of  second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87 , following a three-and-a-half year battle with Lung Cancer .
Revised: Irvin Kershner, director of second Star Wars movie The Empire Strikes Back, died Saturday at his home in Los Angeles, California at the age of 87 , following a three-and-a-half year battle with lung cancer .
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Original:  The announcement of his death was made  by his god-daughter, Adriana Santini , on Monday .
Revised:  The announcement of his death was made Monday, by his god-daughter, Adriana Santini , on Monday .
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Original:  The announcement of his death was made  by his god-daughter, Adriana Santini , on Monday .
Revised:  The announcement of his death was made by his god-daughter, Adriana Santini .
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Original:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer  the directors role for  Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
Revised:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer the directors role for Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
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Original:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer  the directors role for  Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
Revised:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness and Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer the directors role for Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
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Original:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer  the directors role for  Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
Revised:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer the directors role for Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
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Original:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer  the directors role for  Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
Revised:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer the directors role for Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
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Original:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer  the directors role for  Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
Revised:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer him the directors role for Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
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Original:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer  the directors role for  Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
Revised:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer the directors role for The Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
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Original:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer  the directors role for  Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
Revised:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer the directors role for Empire Strikes Back — something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
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Original:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer  the directors role for  Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was valued by him .
Revised:  His previous credits, working as a photographer and musician, included the works " A fine madness " and " Eyes of Laura Mars " , the latter of these two being the inspiration for the creator of the Star Wars movies, George Lucas to offer the directors role for Empire Strikes Back to Kershner - something which he initially refused, only to be later persuaded because Lucas felt his attention to the development of characters was important .
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Original:  Lucas later admitted that he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself.  ]  He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie " Raid on Entebbe " , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the open spotlight.
Revised:  Lucas later admitted he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself. ] He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie " Raid on Entebbe " , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the open spotlight.
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Original:  Lucas later admitted that he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself.  ]  He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie " Raid on Entebbe " , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the open spotlight.
Revised:  Lucas later admitted that he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself. ...] He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie " Raid on Entebbe " , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the open spotlight.
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Original:  Lucas later admitted that he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself.  ]  He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie " Raid on Entebbe " , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the open spotlight.
Revised:  Lucas later admitted that he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself. ] He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie Raid on Entebbe " , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the open spotlight.
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Original:  Lucas later admitted that he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself.  ]  He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie " Raid on Entebbe " , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the open spotlight.
Revised:  Lucas later admitted that he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself. ] He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie " Raid on Entebbe , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the open spotlight.
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Original:  Lucas later admitted that he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself.  ]  He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie " Raid on Entebbe " , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the open spotlight.
Revised:  Lucas later admitted that he hadn't wanted to direct the sequel himself. ] He also gained recognition after being nominated for an Emmy, for the 1976 TV Movie " Raid on Entebbe " , an award which he didn't win, but which thrust him into the spotlight.
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Original:  As a director, Kershner went on to be the driving force behind Sean Connery's return to the role of James Bond, as he went on to direct Never Say Never Again in 1983.
Revised:  As a director, Kershner went on to be the driving force behind Sean Connery's return to the role of James Bond, directing Never Say Never Again in 1983.
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Original:  Moving further into the realms of Science Fiction, Kershner also directed Robocop 2 in 1990.
Revised:  Moving further into the realms of Science Fiction, Kershner directed Robocop 2 in 1990.
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Original:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese , in which he played Zebedee , andalso starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground
Revised:  Kershner was not limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese , in which he played Zebedee , andalso starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground
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Original:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese , in which he played Zebedee , andalso starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground
Revised:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work ; he acted in two films, Martin Scorcese's The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese , in which he played Zebedee , andalso starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese , in which he played Zebedee , andalso starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground
Revised:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ , in which he played Zebedee , andalso starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese , in which he played Zebedee , andalso starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground
Revised:  Kershner wasn't limited to behind the scenes work though, he also acted in 2 movies, The Last Temptation of Christ by Martin Scorcese , in which he played Zebedee ; and, starred as a film director in Stephen Seagal's On Deadly Ground
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Original: Lt. Dan Choi—an openly gay man in the Army—is an advocate of repealing  Don't Ask, Don't Tell .  Arizona Senator John McCain opposes the change.
Revised: Lt. Dan Choi—an openly gay man in the Army—is an advocate of repealing ' Don't Ask, Don't Tell . Arizona Senator John McCain opposes the change.
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Original: Lt. Dan Choi—an openly gay man in the Army—is an advocate of repealing  Don't Ask, Don't Tell .  Arizona Senator John McCain opposes the change.
Revised: Lt. Dan Choi—an openly gay man in the Army—is an advocate of repealing Don't Ask, Don't Tell '. Arizona Senator John McCain opposes the change.
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Original:  ]] A survey conducted by the Pentagon of around 400,000 serving members of the United States military and the families has concluded that most do not believe reform of the rules on gays and lesbians serving in the military would affect morale, unit cohesion or military effectiveness.
Revised:  ]] 400,000 serving members of the United States military and the families has concluded that most do not believe reform of the rules on gays and lesbians serving in the military would affect morale, unit cohesion or military effectiveness.
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Original:  ]] A survey conducted by the Pentagon of around 400,000 serving members of the United States military and the families has concluded that most do not believe reform of the rules on gays and lesbians serving in the military would affect morale, unit cohesion or military effectiveness.
Revised:  ]] A survey conducted by the Pentagon of around 400,000 serving members of the United States military and their families do not believe reform of the rules on gays and lesbians serving in the military would affect morale, unit cohesion or military effectiveness.
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Original:  Only 30\% believed that changing the law would have negative effects, and the report also noted that those who have served with people they know or suspect to be gay have found unit cohesion to not be a problem.
Revised:  Only 30\% believed that changing the law would have negative effect. The report also noted that those who have served with people they know or suspect to be gay have found unit cohesion to not be a problem.
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Original:  Lt. Dan Choi—an openly gay man in the Army—is an advocate of repealing ' Don't Ask, Don't Tell ' . [[File:Raustadt Photo of McCain-1.
Revised:  Lt. Dan Choi—an openly gay man in the Army—is an advocate of repealing " Don't Ask, Don't Tell ' . [[File:Raustadt Photo of McCain-1.
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Original:  Lt. Dan Choi—an openly gay man in the Army—is an advocate of repealing ' Don't Ask, Don't Tell ' . [[File:Raustadt Photo of McCain-1.
Revised:  Lt. Dan Choi—an openly gay man in the Army—is an advocate of repealing ' Don't Ask, Don't Tell " . [[File:Raustadt Photo of McCain-1.
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