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Original:  Sexual Script Theory (SST , Gagnon Simon, 1973 ) and its application in clinical practice are founded on the undeniable reality that the subjective understandings of each person about his or her sexuality (and called a sexual script) substantively determine that person's choice of sexual actions and the subsequent qualitative experiencing of those sexual acts.
Revised:  Sexual Script Theory (SST , Gagnon ) and its application in clinical practice are founded on the undeniable reality that the subjective understandings of each person about his or her sexuality (and called a sexual script) substantively determine that person's choice of sexual actions and the subsequent qualitative experiencing of those sexual acts.
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Original:  Sexual Script Theory (SST , Gagnon Simon, 1973 ) and its application in clinical practice are founded on the undeniable reality that the subjective understandings of each person about his or her sexuality (and called a sexual script) substantively determine that person's choice of sexual actions and the subsequent qualitative experiencing of those sexual acts.
Revised:  Sexual Script Theory (SST , Gagnon Simon, 1973 ) and its application in clinical practice are founded on the idea that the subjective understandings of each person about his or her sexuality (and called a sexual script) substantively determine that person's choice of sexual actions and the subsequent qualitative experiencing of those sexual acts.
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Original: Operational purpose In order to route calls to a phone, cell site|cell towers listen for a signal sent from the phone and negotiate which tower is best able to communicate with the phone.
Revised: Operational purpose In order to route calls to a phone, cell towers listen for a signal sent from the phone and negotiate which tower is best able to communicate with the phone.
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Original:  Localization may be effected by a number of technologies, such as using multilateration of radio signals between (several) cell towers of the network and the phone , or simply using GPS.
Revised:  Localization may be effected by a number of technologies, such as the multilateration of radio signals between (several) cell towers of the network and the phone , or simply using GPS.
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Original:  Localization may be effected by a number of technologies, such as using multilateration of radio signals between (several) cell towers of the network and the phone , or simply using GPS.
Revised:  Localization may be effected by a number of technologies, such as using multilateration of radio signals between (several) cell towers of the network and the phone or by simply using GPS.
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Original:  To locate a mobile phone using multilateration of mobile radio signals, it must emit at least the idle signal to contact nearby antenna towers , but the process does not require an active call.
Revised:  To locate a mobile phone using multilateration of mobile radio signals, the phone must emit at least the idle signal to contact nearby antenna towers , but the process does not require an active call.
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Original:  To locate a mobile phone using multilateration of mobile radio signals, it must emit at least the idle signal to contact nearby antenna towers , but the process does not require an active call.
Revised:  To locate a mobile phone using multilateration of mobile radio signals, it must emit at least the idle signal to contact nearby antenna towers and does not require an active call.
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Original:  The accuracy of network-based techniques varies, with cell identification as the least accurate (due to differential signals transposing between towers, otherwise known as "bouncing signals") and triangulation as moderately accurate, and newer "advanced forward link trilateration" timing methods as the most accurate.
Revised:  The accuracy of network-based techniques varies, with cell identification being the least accurate (due to differential signals transposing between towers, otherwise known as "bouncing signals") and triangulation as moderately accurate, and newer "advanced forward link trilateration" timing methods as the most accurate.
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Original:  Indianapolis Cultural Trail : First permanent art installation along Indianapolis Cultural Trail is illuminated
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Original:   Long-term exercise appears to decrease the rate of falls in older people.
Revised:  PLEASE TELL ME AT WHAT HEIGHT IF I FALL WOULD I DIE LIKE HOW HIGH WOULD THE BUILDING HAVE TO BE Long-term exercise appears to decrease the rate of falls in older people.
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Original:  There also might be age versus cohort effects: URL See also healthy aging .
Revised:  There also might be age versus cohort URL See also healthy aging .
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Original:  There also might be age versus cohort effects: URL See also healthy aging .
Revised:  There also might be age versus cohort effects: URL See also Healthy aging
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Original:  The hypothesis was confirmed by a 1998 study of 1700 University of Pennsylvania alumni over a period of 20 years.
Revised:  The hypothesis was supported by a 1998 study of 1700 University of Pennsylvania alumni over a period of 20 years.
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Original:  Mor v ' The Compression of Morbidity Hypothesis: A Review of Research and Prospects for the Future ' argues that "Cross-national evidence for the validity of the compression of morbidity hypothesis originally proposed by Fries is generally accepted.
Revised:  Vincent Mor's " The Compression of Morbidity Hypothesis: A Review of Research and Prospects for the Future ' argues that "Cross-national evidence for the validity of the compression of morbidity hypothesis originally proposed by Fries is generally accepted.
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Original:  Mor v ' The Compression of Morbidity Hypothesis: A Review of Research and Prospects for the Future ' argues that "Cross-national evidence for the validity of the compression of morbidity hypothesis originally proposed by Fries is generally accepted.
Revised:  Mor v ' The Compression of Morbidity Hypothesis: A Review of Research and Prospects for the Future " argues that "Cross-national evidence for the validity of the compression of morbidity hypothesis originally proposed by Fries is generally accepted.
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Original:  See also Majer Nusselder and MackenbachLife " Expectancy and Life Expectancy With Disability of Normal Weight, Overweight, and Obese Smokers and Nonsmokers in Europe " . Therefore compression may be gender, disease, lifestyle and country specific.
Revised:  See also " Expectancy and Life Expectancy With Disability of Normal Weight, Overweight, and Obese Smokers and Nonsmokers in Europe " . Therefore compression may be gender, disease, lifestyle and country specific.
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Original:  There may also be age versus cohort URL
Revised:  There may also be age versus cohort effects.
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Original: "Temperance Lecture " by Edward Edmondson, Jr., Dayton Art Institute, 1861 Alcoholism in family systems refers to the conditions in families that enable alcoholism, and the effects of alcoholic behavior by one or more family members on the rest of the family.
Revised: Temperance Lecture by Edward Edmondson, Jr., Dayton Art Institute, 1861 Alcoholism in family systems refers to the conditions in families that enable alcoholism, and the effects of alcoholic behavior by one or more family members on the rest of the family.
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Original:  The "Chief Enabler" also often doubles as the "Responsible One , "  or "Family Hero" another role assumed by family members of the alcoholic/addict.
Revised:  The "Chief Enabler" also often doubles as the "Responsible One " or "Family Hero" another role assumed by family members of the alcoholic/addict.
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Original:  The "Chief Enabler" also often doubles as the "Responsible One , "  or "Family Hero" another role assumed by family members of the alcoholic/addict.
Revised:  The "Chief Enabler" also often doubles as the "Responsible One , " , or "Family Hero" another role assumed by family members of the alcoholic/addict.
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Original:  Both the "Chief Enabler" and "Responsible One" (aka "Model Child") will take "over [the alcoholic/addict's] roles and responsibilities . "  For example, a parent might pay for expenses and take over responsibilities (i.e. car payments, the raising of a grandchild, provide room and board, etc.), while a child may provide care for their siblings, become the "peace keeper" in the home, take on all the chores and cooking, etc.
Revised:  Both the "Chief Enabler" and "Responsible One" (aka "Model Child") will take "over [the alcoholic/addict's] roles and responsibilities " For example, a parent might pay for expenses and take over responsibilities (i.e. car payments, the raising of a grandchild, provide room and board, etc.), while a child may provide care for their siblings, become the "peace keeper" in the home, take on all the chores and cooking, etc.
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Original:  Both the "Chief Enabler" and "Responsible One" (aka "Model Child") will take "over [the alcoholic/addict's] roles and responsibilities . "  For example, a parent might pay for expenses and take over responsibilities (i.e. car payments, the raising of a grandchild, provide room and board, etc.), while a child may provide care for their siblings, become the "peace keeper" in the home, take on all the chores and cooking, etc.
Revised:  Both the "Chief Enabler" and "Responsible One" (aka "Model Child") will take "over [the alcoholic/addict's] roles and responsibilities . " . For example, a parent might pay for expenses and take over responsibilities (i.e. car payments, the raising of a grandchild, provide room and board, etc.), while a child may provide care for their siblings, become the "peace keeper" in the home, take on all the chores and cooking, etc.
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Original:  This often "takes the focus off the parental alcohol problem , "  and the child can be the "scapegoat" under the myth that his/her behavior fuels the parent's drinking/using.
Revised:  This often "takes the focus off the parental alcohol problem " and the child can be the "scapegoat" under the myth that his/her behavior fuels the parent's drinking/using.
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Original:  This often "takes the focus off the parental alcohol problem , "  and the child can be the "scapegoat" under the myth that his/her behavior fuels the parent's drinking/using.
Revised:  This often "takes the focus off the parental alcohol problem , " , and the child can be the "scapegoat" under the myth that his/her behavior fuels the parent's drinking/using.
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Original:  These children are known as the "Mascot" or "Family Clown . "  Prevalence Based on the number of children with parents meeting the DSM-V criteria for alcohol abuse or alcohol dependence, in 1996 there were an estimated 26.8 million children of alcoholics (COAs) in the United States of which 11 million were under the age of 18.
Revised:  These children are known as the "Mascot" or "Family Clown " Prevalence Based on the number of children with parents meeting the DSM-V criteria for alcohol abuse or alcohol dependence, in 1996 there were an estimated 26.8 million children of alcoholics (COAs) in the United States of which 11 million were under the age of 18.
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Original:  These children are known as the "Mascot" or "Family Clown . "  Prevalence Based on the number of children with parents meeting the DSM-V criteria for alcohol abuse or alcohol dependence, in 1996 there were an estimated 26.8 million children of alcoholics (COAs) in the United States of which 11 million were under the age of 18.
Revised:  These children are known as the "Mascot" or "Family Clown . " . Prevalence Based on the number of children with parents meeting the DSM-V criteria for alcohol abuse or alcohol dependence, in 1996 there were an estimated 26.8 million children of alcoholics (COAs) in the United States of which 11 million were under the age of 18.
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Original:  As of 1988, it was estimated that 76 million Americans, about 43 \% of the U.S. adult population, have been exposed to alcoholism or problem drinking in the family, either having grown up with an alcoholic, having an alcoholic blood relative, or marrying an alcoholic.
Revised:  As of 1988, it was estimated that 76 million Americans, about 43 percent of the U.S. adult population, have been exposed to alcoholism or problem drinking in the family, either having grown up with an alcoholic, having an alcoholic blood relative, or marrying an alcoholic.
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Original:  While growing up, nearly one in five adult Americans (18 \% ) lived with an alcoholic.
Revised:  While growing up, nearly one in five adult Americans (18 percent ) lived with an alcoholic.
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Original:  For example, in Werner's study, he found that 30 \% of COAs were committing serious delinquencies.
Revised:  For example, in Werner's study, he found that 30 percent of COAs were committing serious delinquencies.
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Original:  6\% of offspring from alcoholic mothers have Fetal Alcohol Syndrome (FAS).
Revised:  Six percent of offspring from alcoholic mothers have Fetal Alcohol Syndrome (FAS).
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Original:  6\% of offspring from alcoholic mothers have Fetal Alcohol Syndrome (FAS).
Revised:  6\% of offspring from alcoholic mothers have fetal alcohol syndrome (FAS).
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Original:  The risk an offspring born to an alcoholic mothers having FAS increases from 6 \% to 70 \% if the mother's previous child had FAS.
Revised:  The risk an offspring born to an alcoholic mothers having FAS increases from 6 percent to 70 \% if the mother's previous child had FAS.
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Original:  The risk an offspring born to an alcoholic mothers having FAS increases from 6 \% to 70 \% if the mother's previous child had FAS.
Revised:  The risk an offspring born to an alcoholic mothers having FAS increases from 6 \% to 70 percent if the mother's previous child had FAS.
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Original: Ramazan Gadzhimuradovich Abdulatipov (, ;) (born 4 August 1946, in the Tlyaratinsky District of the Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic) — is a Dagestan politician of Avar heritage, professor.
Revised: Ramazan Gadzhimuradovich Abdulatipov (, ;) (born 4 August 1946, in the Tlyaratinsky District of the Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic) is a Dagestan politician of Avar heritage, professor.
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Original:  ) ( born 4 August 1946, in the Tlyaratinsky District of the Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic)is a Dagestan politician and professor of Avar heritage.
Revised:  born 4 August 1946, in the Tlyaratinsky District of the Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic)is a Dagestan politician and professor of Avar heritage.
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Original: Ramazan Gadzhimuradovich Abdulatipov ( , ;
Revised: Ramazan Gadzhimuradovich Abdulatipov ( ; ;
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Original:  born 4 August 1946 , in the Tlyaratinsky District of the Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic)is a Dagestan politician and professor of Avar heritage.
Revised:  born 4 August 1946 in the Tlyaratinsky District of the Dagestan Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic)is a Dagestan politician and professor of Avar heritage.
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Original: Members of the Tajik Academy of Sciences Category:Recipients of the Order of Honour (Russia) Category:Honoured Scientists of the Russian Federation Category:Avar people Category:Russian people of Dagestani descent Category:Russian Sunni Muslims Category:Deputy heads of government of the Russian Federation Abdulatipov Category:Recipients of the Order "For Merit to the Fatherland", 4th class Category:Second convocation members of the State Duma (Russian  Federatio
Revised: Members of the Tajik Academy of Sciences Category:Recipients of the Order of Honour (Russia) Category:Honoured Scientists of the Russian Federation Category:Avar people Category:Russian people of Dagestani descent Category:Russian Sunni Muslims Category:Deputy heads of government of the Russian Federation Abdulatipov Category:Recipients of the Order "For Merit to the Fatherland", 4th class Category:Second convocation members of the State Duma (Russian Federation) Category:Fourth convocation members of the State Duma (Russian Federatio
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Original:  Political factors also have a bearing on an agrarian system due to issues such as land ownership, labour organization, and forms of cultivation.
Revised:  Political factors also have a bearing on an agrarian system due to issues such as land ownership, labor organization, and forms of cultivation.
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Original:  China developed an agrarian system based on labor intensive wet rice cultivation were skill was paramount.
Revised:  China developed an agrarian system based on labor intensive wet rice cultivation where skill was paramount.
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Original:  China developed an agrarian system based on labor intensive wet rice cultivation where skill was paramount.
Revised:  China developed an agrarian system based on labor-intensive wet rice cultivation where skill was paramount.
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Original:  Political factors also have a bearing on an agrarian system due to issues such as land ownership, labor organization, and forms of cultivation.
Revised:  Political factors also have a bearing on an agrarian system due to ilssues such as land ownership, labor organization, and forms of cultivation.
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Original:  It was envisioned that 600,000 African families would have farming units of approximately ten acres a family, which would raise their average productivity in cash sales from ₤ 10 to ₤ 100 a year after providing for their own needs.
Revised:  It was envisioned that 600,000 African families would have farming units of approximately ten acres a family, which would raise their average productivity in cash sales from ₤ 10 to £ 100 a year after providing for their own needs.
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Original:  When the Swynnerton Report was first published, its findings, in complement with the East Africa Royal Commission 1953-1955 , was a reversal of previous colonial policies on native agricultural practises.
Revised:  When the Swynnerton Report was first published, its findings, in complement with the East Africa Royal Commission 1953–1955 , was a reversal of previous colonial policies on native agricultural practises.
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Original:  Impacts on the Political-Economy Plan implementation, however, must be viewed in context of the greater Mau Mau Uprising and the colonial government's declaration of a state of Emergency, during which time villagization of the Kikuyu occurred, lending it to serve the politically expedient needs of the colonial government.
Revised:  Impacts on the political economy Plan implementation, however, must be viewed in context of the greater Mau Mau Uprising and the colonial government's declaration of a state of Emergency, during which time villagization of the Kikuyu occurred, lending it to serve the politically expedient needs of the colonial government.
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Original:  Impacts on the Political-Economy Plan implementation, however, must be viewed in context of the greater Mau Mau Uprising and the colonial government's declaration of a state of Emergency, during which time villagization of the Kikuyu occurred, lending it to serve the politically expedient needs of the colonial government.
Revised:  Impacts on the Political-Economy Plan implementation, however, must be viewed in context of the greater Mau Mau Uprising and the colonial government's declaration of a state of Emergency, during which time villagisation of the Kikuyu occurred, lending it to serve the politically expedient needs of the colonial government.
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Original:  In the words of the Special Commissioner for Central Province, 'Thus land consolidation was to complete the work of the Emergency: to stabilize a conservative middle class, based on the loyalists;
Revised:  In the words of the Special Commissioner for Central Province, 'Thus land consolidation was to complete the work of the Emergency: to stabilise a conservative middle class, based on the loyalists;
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Original:  So the state intensified the spread of cash crops and dairy cattle in the African reserves, on the startling new basis of generalized private, freehold, property.
Revised:  So the state intensified the spread of cash crops and dairy cattle in the African reserves, on the startling new basis of generalised private, freehold, property.
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Original: Plan implementation, however, must be viewed in context of the greater Mau Mau Uprising and the colonial government's declaration of a state of Emergency, during which time villagisation of the Kikuyu occurred, lending it to serve the politically expedient needs of the colonial government.
Revised: The plan was implemented during the Mau Mau Uprising and the colonial government's declaration of a state of Emergency, during which time villagisation of the Kikuyu occurred, lending it to serve the politically expedient needs of the colonial government.
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Original: Plan implementation, however, must be viewed in context of the greater Mau Mau Uprising and the colonial government's declaration of a state of Emergency, during which time villagisation of the Kikuyu occurred, lending it to serve the politically expedient needs of the colonial government.
Revised: Plan implementation, however, must be viewed in context of the greater Mau Mau Uprising , and implementation served the politically expedient needs of the colonial government.
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Original:  For  Kikuyu, land registration and consolidation during the Emergency was the final, bitter, codification of Kikuyu clan history.
Revised:  For the Kikuyu, land registration and consolidation during the Emergency was the final, bitter, codification of Kikuyu clan history.
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Original: The Swynnerton Plan was a colonial agricultural policy that appeared as a government report in 1954 in Kenya, aiming to intensify the development of agricultural practise in the Kenya Colony.
Revised: The Swynnerton Plan was a colonial agricultural policy that appeared as a government report in 1954 in Kenya, aiming to intensify the development of agricultural practice in the Kenya Colony.
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Original:  When the Swynnerton Report was first published, its findings, in complement with the East Africa Royal Commission 1953–1955, was a reversal of previous colonial policies on native agricultural practises .
Revised:  When the Swynnerton Report was first published, its findings, in complement with the East Africa Royal Commission 1953–1955, was a reversal of previous colonial policies on native agricultural practices .
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Original: When the Swynnerton Report was first published, its findings, in complement with the East Africa Royal Commission 1953–1955, was a reversal of previous colonial policies on native agricultural practices.
Revised: When the Swynnerton Report was first published, its findings, in complement with the East Africa Royal Commission 1953–1955, were a reversal of previous colonial policies on native agricultural practices.
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Original:  In 1901 the Cook Islands were transferred to the administration of New Zealand.
Revised:  In 1901 , when it was given to New Zealand.
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Original:  He joined the Legislative Assembly in 1961 as one of seven members elected to represent South West Africa's White citizens in the Parliament of South Africa .
Revised:  He was elected to the whites-only Legislative Assembly in 1961 as one of seven members elected to represent South West Africa's White citizens in the Parliament of South Africa .
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