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Original:  This year is an 80 years anniversary of the first Monaco Grand Prix, but this one is only  67th GP on this circuit because some of the years it wasn't held
Revised:  This year is an 80 years anniversary of the first Monaco Grand Prix, but this one is only the 67th GP on this circuit because some of the years it wasn't held
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Original:  This year is an 80 years anniversary of the first Monaco Grand Prix, but this one is only  67th GP on this circuit because some of the years it wasn't held
Revised:  This year is an 80 years anniversary of the first Monaco Grand Prix, but this one is only 67th GP on this circuit because some years it wasn't held
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Original:  Japan's government has set up a special task force at the crisis management center in the prime minister's official residence  
Revised:  Japan's government has set up a special task force at the crisis management center in the prime minister's official residence . 
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Original:  The People's Republic of China, the United States, Russia  and the European Union have all condemned the test.
Revised:  The People's Republic of China, the United States, Russia , and the European Union have all condemned the test.
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Original:  Since the late 1990s, when the Cincinnati Zoo received the last three surviving captive rhinos in captivity in the United States, she has studied the mating of the female and male rhinos and the female's pregnancy.
Revised:  Since the late 1990s, when the Cincinnati Zoo received the last three surviving captive rhinos in the United States, she has studied the mating of the female and male rhinos and the female's pregnancy.
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Original:  Since the late 1990s, when the Cincinnati Zoo received the last three surviving captive rhinos in captivity in the United States, she has studied the mating of the female and male rhinos and the female's pregnancy.
Revised:  Since the late 1990s, when the Cincinnati Zoo received the last three surviving captive rhinos in captivity in the United States, she has studied their mating and pregnancy.
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Original:  This is going to be a hard species to save.
Revised:  This is going to be a tough one to save.
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Original:  Indonesia will not be sending the US zoos any more Sumatran rhinos, Roth said, and for them it is a matter of national pride to rescue the Sumatran rhino
Revised:  Indonesia will not be sending the US zoos any more Sumatran rhinos, Roth said, and for Indonesia it is a matter of national pride to rescue the Sumatran rhino
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Original: Police forensic investigators  continue the search for the body of eight year old Victoria Staffordwho they now believe was murdered  the same day whe was abducted, April 8, 2009 from her Woodstock, Ontario school. upWoodstock county Counsellors are providing support to students at Oliver Stephens Public School.
Revised: Police forensic investigators continue the search for the body of eight-year-old Victoria Stafford, whom they now believe was murdered the same day whe was abducted, April 8, 2009 from her Woodstock, Ontario school. upWoodstock county Counsellors are providing support to students at Oliver Stephens Public School.
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Original: Police forensic investigators  continue the search for the body of eight year old Victoria Staffordwho they now believe was murdered  the same day whe was abducted, April 8, 2009 from her Woodstock, Ontario school. upWoodstock county Counsellors are providing support to students at Oliver Stephens Public School.
Revised: Police forensic investigators continue the search for the body of eight year old Victoria Staffordwho they now believe was murdered on the same day whe was abducted, April 8, 2009 from her Woodstock, Ontario school. upWoodstock county Counsellors are providing support to students at Oliver Stephens Public School.
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Original: Police forensic investigators  continue the search for the body of eight year old Victoria Staffordwho they now believe was murdered  the same day whe was abducted, April 8, 2009 from her Woodstock, Ontario school. upWoodstock county Counsellors are providing support to students at Oliver Stephens Public School.
Revised: Police forensic investigators continue the search for the body of eight year old Victoria Staffordwho they now believe was murdered the same day she was abducted, April 8, 2009 from her Woodstock, Ontario school. upWoodstock county Counsellors are providing support to students at Oliver Stephens Public School.
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Original: Police forensic investigators  continue the search for the body of eight year old Victoria Staffordwho they now believe was murdered  the same day whe was abducted, April 8, 2009 from her Woodstock, Ontario school. upWoodstock county Counsellors are providing support to students at Oliver Stephens Public School.
Revised: Police forensic investigators continue the search for the body of eight year old Victoria Staffordwho they now believe was murdered the same day whe was abducted, April 8, 2009 from her Woodstock, Ontario school. Counselors are providing support to students at Oliver Stephens Public School.
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Original:  "We continue to receive information on all different parts of the investigation and each piece of lead or tip, if you will, is being investigated as far as it can take us," said Laurie-Anne Maitland, an Oxford Community Police Constable , "If I were her parent I would want to have that ounce of hope too until I knew 100 per cent.
Revised:  "We continue to receive information on all different parts of the investigation and each piece of lead or tip, if you will, is being investigated as far as it can take us," said Laurie-Anne Maitland, an Oxford Community Police Constable . "If I were her parent I would want to have that ounce of hope too until I knew 100 per cent.
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Original:  I think it's the nature ( of people to hope for ) one possible little miracle ... and it's not (possible) ."
Revised:  I think it's the nature of people to hope for ) one possible little miracle ... and it's not (possible) ."
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Original:  I think it's the nature ( of people to hope for ) one possible little miracle ... and it's not (possible) ."
Revised:  I think it's the nature ( of people to hope for one possible little miracle ... and it's not (possible) ."
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Original:  I think it's the nature ( of people to hope for ) one possible little miracle ... and it's not (possible) ."
Revised:  I think it's the nature ( of people to hope for ) one possible little miracle ... and it's not possible ."
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Original: The search continues for the search for the body of Tori as well as the rear seat of a vehicle connected with the abduction.
Revised: The search continues for the body of Tori as well as the rear seat of a vehicle connected with the abduction.
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Original:  The search area is around Guelph, and Fergus , Ontario north east of Woodstock.
Revised:  The search area is around Guelph, and Fergus north east of Woodstock.
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Original:  Her nomination in 2009 was urged by New York senators Kirsten Gillibrand and Chuck Schumer, both Democrats.
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Original:  Sotomayor would take the seat of retiring justice David Souter .
Revised:  Sotomayor would take the seat of retiring justice .
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Original: Obama and SotomayorThe 54-year-old Sotomayor, who was born in New York City and attended Princeton University and Yale University, is the first female U.S. Supreme Court nominee of Hispanic or Latino extraction and, if confirmed, would become the third female U.S. Supreme Court justice, following Sandra Day O'Connor and serving alongside Ruth Bader Ginsburg.
Revised: Obama and SotomayorThe 54-year-old Sotomayor, who was born in New York City and attended Princeton University and Yale University, is the first female U.S. Supreme Court nominee of Hispanic or Latino extraction and, if confirmed, would become the third female U.S. Supreme Court justice, following and serving alongside Ruth Bader Ginsburg.
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Original:  The latest console data from the NPD Group shows that, in April, Nintendo's DSi handheld console outsold all other consoles in America in it's first month of release.
Revised:  The latest console data from the NPD Group shows that, in April, Nintendo's DSi handheld console outsold all other consoles in America in its first month of release.
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Original:  Previous testimony revealed that Hodgkin's lymphoma which was diagnosed January has a 90 to 95\% success rate for survvial with chemotherapy.
Revised:  Previous testimony revealed that Hodgkin's lymphoma which was diagnosed January has a 90 to 95\% success rate for survial with chemotherapy.
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Original:  Discussion of the ongonig UK parliamentary expenses scandal and its implications for MEPs, who draw salaries and expenses considerably higher than Westminster MPs do, dominated the early discussion.
Revised:  Discussion of the ongoing UK parliamentary expenses scandal and its implications for MEPs, who draw salaries and expenses considerably higher than Westminster MPs do, dominated the early discussion.
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Original:  Voting for the European Parliament elections takes place June 4 in the United Kingdom 
Revised:  Voting for the European Parliament elections in the United Kingdom 
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Original:  Voting for the European Parliament elections takes place June 4 in the United Kingdom 
Revised:  Voting for the European Parliament elections takes place June 4 in the United Kingdom takes place June 4
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Original: Cardiff — Labour, Plaid Cymru, and No2EU candidates for the Wales seats in the European Parliament met at Cardiff's Sandringham Hotel last night for the second of two pre-election hustings debates hosted by Cardiff Trades Union Congress.
Revised:  Labour, Plaid Cymru, and No2EU candidates for the Wales seats in the European Parliament met at Cardiff's Sandringham Hotel last night for the second of two pre-election hustings debates hosted by Cardiff Trades Union Congress.
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Original:  Over the 4 days of events, it is estimated that over 16,000 people were in attendance.   
Revised:  Over the 4 days of events, it is estimated that over 16,000 people were in attendance. At the convention it is no uncommon to find attendees cosplaying as their favorite anime or video game characters. In fact a majority of con goer's seem to be dressed up in one form or another. Some of these people have spent the previous year making their costume and most will gladly pose for any request of pictures. Unlike Japan, cosplaying in America is a fairly rare occurrence so when costumed con goers wander away from the Convention floor, then tend to get confused looks by passers by. The attendees flood to the local establishments during the weekend, which the business take in stride and with appreciation of their business.
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Original:  Over the 4 days of events, it is estimated that over 16,000 people were in attendance  .
Revised:  It was estimated that over 16,000 people were in attendance .
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Original:  Over the 4 days of events, it is estimated that over 16,000 people were in attendance  .
Revised:  Over the 4 days of events, it is estimated that over 16,000 people were in attendance over the 4 day course of events .
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Original:  During the weekend there was numerous events for attendees to participate in . Some of the most popular proved to be the panels which varied in topic from "Editing Manga" and "Intro to Lolita and Fashon Show" to one titled "How to talk to girls".
Revised:  During the weekend there were numerous events in which attendees were able to participate . Some of the most popular proved to be the panels which varied in topic from "Editing Manga" and "Intro to Lolita and Fashon Show" to one titled "How to talk to girls".
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Original:  During the weekend there was numerous events for attendees to participate in . Some of the most popular proved to be the panels which varied in topic from "Editing Manga" and "Intro to Lolita and Fashon Show" to one titled "How to talk to girls".
Revised:  During the weekend there was numerous events for attendees to participate in . Some of the most popular proved to be the panels which varied in topic from "Editing Manga" , "Intro to Lolita and Fashon Show" to one titled "How to talk to girls".
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Original:  During the weekend there was numerous events for attendees to participate in . Some of the most popular proved to be the panels which varied in topic from "Editing Manga" and "Intro to Lolita and Fashon Show" to one titled "How to talk to girls".
Revised:  During the weekend there was numerous events for attendees to participate in . Some of the most popular proved to be the panels which varied in topic from "Editing Manga" and "Intro to Lolita and Fashion Show" to one titled "How to talk to girls".
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Original:  During the weekend there was numerous events for attendees to participate in . Some of the most popular proved to be the panels which varied in topic from "Editing Manga" and "Intro to Lolita and Fashon Show" to one titled "How to talk to girls".
Revised:  During the weekend there was numerous events for attendees to participate in . Some of the most popular proved to be the panels which varied in topic from "Editing Manga" and "Intro to Lolita and Fashon Show" , and "How to talk to girls".
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Original:  Along with the panels there talks and autograph sessions with the conventions guests of honors which included: Haruko Momoi, Hiroyuki Yamaga, Ken Lally, Reuben Langdon, Patricia Ja Lee, Carl Gustav Horn, Gilles Poitras, Jonathan Osborne, Keith Burgess, Ric Meyers, and Ryan Gavigan.
Revised:  Along with the panels there talks and autograph sessions with the convention's guests of honor which included: Haruko Momoi, Hiroyuki Yamaga, Ken Lally, Reuben Langdon, Patricia Ja Lee, Carl Gustav Horn, Gilles Poitras, Jonathan Osborne, Keith Burgess, Ric Meyers, and Ryan Gavigan.
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Original:  For those that were more action oriented, this years FanimeCon introduced "The Dojo" which featured hourly training sessions and weapons instructions.
Revised:  For those that were more action oriented, this year's FanimeCon introduced "The Dojo" which featured hourly training sessions and weapons instructions.
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Original:  At the convention it is no uncommon to find attendeescosplaying as their favorite anime or video game characters.
Revised:  Cosplaying is not an uncommon occurrence for this convention's attendees. Typically, the cosplaying is based on the attendee's favorite anime or video game characters.
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Original:  In fact a majority of con goer's seem to be dressed up in one form or another.
Revised:  In fact a majority of con goer's seemed to be dressed up in one form or another.
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Original:  Some of these people have spent the previous year making their costume and most will gladly pose for any request of pictures.
Revised:  Some of these people had spent the previous year making their costume and most will gladly pose for any request of pictures.
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Original:  Some of these people have spent the previous year making their costume and most will gladly pose for any request of pictures.
Revised:  Some of these people have spent the previous year making their costume and most were gladly posing for pictures.
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Original:  Unlike Japan, cosplaying in America is a fairly rare occurrence so when costumed con goers wander away from the Convention floor, then tend to get confused looks by passers by.
Revised:  Unlike Japan, cosplaying in America is a fairly rare occurrence , thus when the costumed attendees wandered away from the Convention floor, then tend to get confused looks by passers by.
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Original:  Unlike Japan, cosplaying in America is a fairly rare occurrence so when costumed con goers wander away from the Convention floor, then tend to get confused looks by passers by.
Revised:  Unlike Japan, cosplaying in America is a fairly rare occurrence so when costumed con goers wander away from the convention floor, they tended to get confused looks by passers by.
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Original:  The attendees flood to the local establishments during the weekend, which the business take in stride and with appreciation of their business .
Revised:  The attendees flood to the local establishments during the weekend, which the businesses take in stride and with appreciation of their business .
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Original:  The attendees flood to the local establishments during the weekend, which the business take in stride and with appreciation of their business .
Revised:  The attendees flood to the local establishments during the weekend, which the business take in stride and with great appreciation (perhaps even more so given the current financial difficulties) for their custom .
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Original: Rhys Williams and Dario Vidosic were called up to the national team for the first time after impressing for thier respective clubs.
Revised: Rhys Williams and Dario Vidosic were called up to the national team for the first time after impressing for their respective clubs.
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Original:  Long time national team member Mark Viduka was left out of the 30 man squad.
Revised:  Long-time national team member Mark Viduka was left out of the 30 man squad.
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Original:  Nick Carle, Brad Jones, Adrian Madaschi, Mark Milligan, Matthew Spiranovic and Shane Steffanuto have been out of the side for varying length of time and all return for the qualifiers.
Revised:  Nick Carle, Brad Jones, Adrian Madaschi, Mark Milligan, Matthew Spiranovic and Shane Steffanuto have been out of the side for varying lengths of time and all return for the qualifiers.
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Original:  They need to one point (a draw) from thier remaining three games to qualify for the World Cup in South Africa
Revised:  They need to one point (a draw) from their remaining three games to qualify for the World Cup in South Africa
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Original: Long-time national team member Mark Viduka was left out of the 30 man squad.
Revised: Long-time national team member Mark Viduka was left out of the 30-man squad.
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Original:  Jason Culina , who has signed with Gold Coast United  , is the exception.
Revised:  Jason Culina , who has signed with Gold Coast United FC , is the exception.
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Original: Tim Cahill Mark Schartzer Mark Bresciano Lucus Neill Australian national football coach Pim Verbeek has named the Socceroos team to participate in the teams remaining qualifiers for the 2010 FIFA World Cup . All but one of the squad play in foreign leagues  . Jason Čulina, who has signed with Gold Coast United FC, is the exception . Rhys Williams and Dario Vidosic were called up to the national team for the first time after impressing for their respective clubs.
Revised: Tim Cahill Mark Schartzer Mark Bresciano Lucus Neill Australian national football coach Pim Verbeek has pooped his pants . All but one of the squad play in foreign leagues . Jason Čulina, who has signed with Gold Coast United FC, is the exception . Rhys Williams and Dario Vidosic were called up to the national team for the first time after impressing for their respective clubs.
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Original: Tim Cahill Mark Schartzer Mark Bresciano Lucus Neill Australian national football coach Pim Verbeek has named the Socceroos team to participate in the teams remaining qualifiers for the 2010 FIFA World Cup . All but one of the squad play in foreign leagues  . Jason Čulina, who has signed with Gold Coast United FC, is the exception . Rhys Williams and Dario Vidosic were called up to the national team for the first time after impressing for their respective clubs.
Revised: Tim Cahill Mark Schartzer Mark Bresciano Lucus Neill Australian national football coach Pim Verbeek has named the Socceroos team to participate in the teams remaining qualifiers for the 2010 FIFA World Cup . All but one of the squad play in foreign leagues . Jason Čulina, who has signed with Gold Coast United FC, is the exception . Rhys Williams and Dario Vidosic were called up to the national team for the first time after impressing for their respective 
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Original:  Williams has previously represented the Wales national under-21 football team on ten occasions but recently declared his desire to be selected in the Australian senior side.
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Original:  If he makes the decision not to play anymore, then we have to respect his decision."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nick Carle, Brad Jones, Adrian Madaschi, Mark Milligan, Matthew Spiranovic and Shane Steffanuto, who have been out of the side for varying lengths of time, all return for the qualifiers.
Revised:  If he makes the decision not to play anymore, then we have to respect his decision."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: Workers at the Linamar automobile parts factory in Swansea, Wales voted by a wide margin today to strike, after an dispute over the firing of one of the worker's union organisers remained unresolved.
Revised: The Linamar plant in SwanseaWorkers at the Linamar automobile parts factory in Swansea, Wales voted by a wide margin today to strike, after an dispute over the firing of one of the worker's union organisers remained unresolved.
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Original:  After a shaky start, Samuel Eto'o shot the ball past Manchester United goalkeeper Edwin van der Sar in the tenth minute, the only goal Barcelona would need.
Revised:  After a shaky start, Samuel Eto'o shot the ball past Manchester United goalkeeper Edwin Clinical Pharmacology and Therapeutics Clinical Pharmacology and Therapeutics Van der Sar in the tenth minute, the only goal Barcelona would need.
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Original:  However it was Eto'o who capitalized on his teams first real chance striking a low ball that van der Sar could get hands to.
Revised:  However it was Eto'o who capitalized on his teams first real chance striking a low ball that Van der Sar could get hands to.
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Original:  Four minutes later, Barca captain Carles Puyol has a great chance on goal, but van der Saar in the United goal is equal to the task.
Revised:  Four minutes later, Barca captain Carles Puyol has a great chance on goal, but Van der Sar in the United goal is equal to the task.
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Original:  After a shaky start, Samuel Eto'o shot the ball past Manchester United goalkeeper Edwin Clinical Pharmacology and Therapeutics Clinical Pharmacology and Therapeutics Van der Sar in the tenth minute, the only goal Barcelona would need.
Revised:  After a shaky start, Samuel Eto'o shot the ball past Manchester United goalkeeper Edwin van der Sar in the tenth minute, the only goal Barcelona would need.
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Original:  However it was Eto'o who capitalized on his teams first real chance striking a low ball that Van der Sar could get hands to.
Revised:  However it was Eto'o who capitalized on his teams first real chance striking a low ball that van der Sar could get hands to.
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Original:  Four minutes later, Barca captain Carles Puyol has a great chance on goal, but Van der Sar in the United goal is equal to the task.
Revised:  Four minutes later, Barca captain Carles Puyol has a great chance on goal, but van der Saar in the United goal is equal to the task.
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Original:  After a shaky start, Samuel Eto'o shot the ball past Manchester United goalkeeper Edwin van der Sar in the tenth minute, the only goal Barcelona would need.
Revised:  After a shaky start, shot the ball past Manchester United goalkeeper Edwin van der Sar in the tenth minute, the only goal Barcelona would need.
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