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Original: Private life Dirk Mudge retired from politics in April 1993 and returned to his farm Ovikere near Kalkfeld in Namibia's Otjozondjupa Region.
Revised: Retirement Dirk Mudge retired from politics in April 1993 and returned to his farm Ovikere near Kalkfeld in Namibia's Otjozondjupa Region.
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Original:   In 2020, Mudge contracted COVID-19 and developed a lung infection.
Revised:  Death In 2020, Mudge contracted COVID-19 and developed a lung infection.
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Original: Retirement  Death In 2020, Mudge contracted COVID-19 during the COVID-19 pandemic in Namibia and developed a lung infection.
Revised: Retirement and death Death In 2020, Mudge contracted COVID-19 during the COVID-19 pandemic in Namibia and developed a lung infection.
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Original: Retirement  Death In 2020, Mudge contracted COVID-19 during the COVID-19 pandemic in Namibia and developed a lung infection.
Revised: Retirement In 2020, Mudge contracted COVID-19 during the COVID-19 pandemic in Namibia and developed a lung infection.
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Original:  Dirk Mudge passes away, Informanté, 26 August 2020.
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Original:  "I Wanna Go Back" Europe - "Rock the Night" Europe - "Carrie"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1987 The Robert Cray Band - "Nothin' But a Woman" Jennifer Rush Elton John - "Flames of Paradise" Mason Ruffner - "Dancing on Top of the World" Jennifer Rush - "Heart Over Mind" Eddie Money - "We Should Be Sleeping" Europe - "Cherokee"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1988 The Alarm - "Presence of Love" Cinderella - "Gypsy Road" Europe - "Superstitious" Cinderella - "Don't Know What You Got (till It's Gone)"
Revised:  "I Wanna Go Back" Europe - "Rock the Night" Europe - "Carrie"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Elton John - "Flames of Paradise" Mason Ruffner - "Dancing on Top of the World" Jennifer Rush - "Heart Over Mind" Eddie Money - "We Should Be Sleeping" Europe - "Cherokee"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1988 The Alarm - "Presence of Love" Cinderella - "Gypsy Road" Europe - "Superstitious" Cinderella - "Don't Know What You Got (till It's Gone)"
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Original:  "Heart and Soul" Warrant - "Big Talk" Bad English - "Price of Love" 1991 Roadhouse - "Tower of Love" Steelheart - "She's Gone" Bad English - "Straight to Your Heart" Europe - "Prisoners in Paradise" Warrant - "I Saw Red"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Other work THE BT DIGITAL MUSIC AWARDS 2007 5 Programmes for Channel 4 With Natasha Bedingfield, Paul McCartney, Mutya Buena, Kate Nash, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour - “Remember That Night” Launch.
Revised:  "Heart and Soul" Warrant - "Big Talk" Bad English - "Price of Love" %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Other work THE BT DIGITAL MUSIC AWARDS 2007 5 Programmes for Channel 4 With Natasha Bedingfield, Paul McCartney, Mutya Buena, Kate Nash, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour - “Remember That Night” Launch.
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Original:  "Heart and Soul" Warrant - "Big Talk" Bad English - "Price of Love" 1991 Roadhouse - "Tower of Love" Steelheart - "She's Gone" Bad English - "Straight to Your Heart" Europe - "Prisoners in Paradise" Warrant - "I Saw Red"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Other work THE BT DIGITAL MUSIC AWARDS 2007 5 Programmes for Channel 4 With Natasha Bedingfield, Paul McCartney, Mutya Buena, Kate Nash, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour - “Remember That Night” Launch.
Revised:  "Heart and Soul" Warrant - "Big Talk" Bad English - "Price of Love" 1991 Roadhouse - "Tower of Love" Steelheart - "She's Gone" Bad English - "Straight to Your Heart" Europe - "Prisoners in Paradise" Warrant - "I Saw Red"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE BT DIGITAL MUSIC AWARDS 2007 5 Programmes for Channel 4 With Natasha Bedingfield, Paul McCartney, Mutya Buena, Kate Nash, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour - “Remember That Night” Launch.
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Original:  Biggest-ever Cinema simulcast of live performances, Q A and show extracts from the Odeon Leicester Square (to cinemas across Europe) and the Ritzy, Brixton (to cinemas across North America)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% MITCHELL WEBB -
Revised:  Biggest-ever Cinema simulcast of live performances, Q %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% MITCHELL WEBB -
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Original:  Biggest-ever Cinema simulcast of live performances, Q A and show extracts from the Odeon Leicester Square (to cinemas across Europe) and the Ritzy, Brixton (to cinemas across North America)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% MITCHELL WEBB -
Revised:  Biggest-ever Cinema simulcast of live performances, Q A and show extracts from the Odeon Leicester Square (to cinemas across Europe) and the Ritzy, Brixton (to cinemas across North America)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% WEBB -
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Original:  THE TWO FACES OF MITCHELL%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WEBB The stars of those Apple ads The Peep show live on DVD%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE DARK SIDE OF THE MOON - LIVE Roger Waters live in the UK and Canada for HD DVD SPAMALOT The Tony award winning musical in London.
Revised:  THE TWO FACES OF MITCHELL%DIFDELCMD < & %%% The Peep show live on DVD%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE DARK SIDE OF THE MOON - LIVE Roger Waters live in the UK and Canada for HD DVD SPAMALOT The Tony award winning musical in London.
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Original:  THE TWO FACES OF MITCHELL%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WEBB The stars of those Apple ads The Peep show live on DVD%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE DARK SIDE OF THE MOON - LIVE Roger Waters live in the UK and Canada for HD DVD SPAMALOT The Tony award winning musical in London.
Revised:  THE TWO FACES OF MITCHELL%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WEBB The stars of those Apple ads %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE DARK SIDE OF THE MOON - LIVE Roger Waters live in the UK and Canada for HD DVD SPAMALOT The Tony award winning musical in London.
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Original:  THE TWO FACES OF MITCHELL%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WEBB The stars of those Apple ads The Peep show live on DVD%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE DARK SIDE OF THE MOON - LIVE Roger Waters live in the UK and Canada for HD DVD SPAMALOT The Tony award winning musical in London.
Revised:  THE TWO FACES OF MITCHELL%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WEBB The stars of those Apple ads The Peep show live on DVD%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SPAMALOT The Tony award winning musical in London.
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Original:  STIFF UPPER LIP 26 camera shoot in the Olympic stadium, Munich (live DVD) JAMIROQUAI Live Channel 4 shoot at the B-Live festival%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% CIRQUE DU SOLEIL “ALEGRIA” Filmed live in the Grand Chapiteau in Sydney, Nominated, Outstanding Variety, Music or Comedy Special, 2002 Primetime Emmy awards.
Revised:  STIFF UPPER LIP 26 camera shoot in the Olympic stadium, Munich (live DVD) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% CIRQUE DU SOLEIL “ALEGRIA” Filmed live in the Grand Chapiteau in Sydney, Nominated, Outstanding Variety, Music or Comedy Special, 2002 Primetime Emmy awards.
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Original:  STIFF UPPER LIP 26 camera shoot in the Olympic stadium, Munich (live DVD) JAMIROQUAI Live Channel 4 shoot at the B-Live festival%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% CIRQUE DU SOLEIL “ALEGRIA” Filmed live in the Grand Chapiteau in Sydney, Nominated, Outstanding Variety, Music or Comedy Special, 2002 Primetime Emmy awards.
Revised:  STIFF UPPER LIP 26 camera shoot in the Olympic stadium, Munich (live DVD) JAMIROQUAI Live Channel 4 shoot at the B-Live festival%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  THE MIGHTY BOOSH LIVE Live DVD recorded at Brixton Academy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE BIG CHILL 60 min Channel Four Music Festival / live music documentary%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BILL BAILEY “PART TROLL” Multicamera live concert DVD Channel 4 TV show.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE BIG CHILL 60 min Channel Four Music Festival / live music documentary%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BILL BAILEY “PART TROLL” Multicamera live concert DVD Channel 4 TV show.
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Original:  THE MIGHTY BOOSH LIVE Live DVD recorded at Brixton Academy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE BIG CHILL 60 min Channel Four Music Festival / live music documentary%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BILL BAILEY “PART TROLL” Multicamera live concert DVD Channel 4 TV show.
Revised:  THE MIGHTY BOOSH LIVE Live DVD recorded at Brixton Academy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE BIG CHILL 60 min Channel Four Music Festival / live music %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BILL BAILEY “PART TROLL” Multicamera live concert DVD Channel 4 TV show.
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Original:  THE MIGHTY BOOSH LIVE Live DVD recorded at Brixton Academy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE BIG CHILL 60 min Channel Four Music Festival / live music documentary%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BILL BAILEY “PART TROLL” Multicamera live concert DVD Channel 4 TV show.
Revised:  THE MIGHTY BOOSH LIVE Live DVD recorded at Brixton Academy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE BIG CHILL 60 min Channel Four Music Festival / live music documentary%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Channel 4 TV show.
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Original:  THE MIGHTY BOOSH LIVE Live DVD recorded at Brixton Academy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE BIG CHILL 60 min Channel Four Music Festival / live music documentary%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BILL BAILEY “PART TROLL” Multicamera live concert DVD Channel 4 TV show.
Revised:  THE MIGHTY BOOSH LIVE Live DVD recorded at Brixton Academy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE BIG CHILL 60 min Channel Four Music Festival / live music documentary%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BILL BAILEY “PART TROLL” Multicamera live concert DVD 
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Original:  (2000, 2001 and 2004)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% UMOJA Live DVD of the African musical spectacular, in Durban, South Africa.
Revised:  (2000, 2001 and 2004)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  PINK – LIVE IN LONDON Seen on Channel 4, MTV, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% TERENCE TRENT D’ARBY – INTRODUCING THE HARDLINE LIVE Concert/Documentary in Munich, for Channel 4.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SIMPLY RED;
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% TERENCE TRENT D’ARBY – INTRODUCING THE HARDLINE LIVE Concert/Documentary in Munich, for Channel 4.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SIMPLY RED;
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Original:  PINK – LIVE IN LONDON Seen on Channel 4, MTV, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% TERENCE TRENT D’ARBY – INTRODUCING THE HARDLINE LIVE Concert/Documentary in Munich, for Channel 4.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SIMPLY RED;
Revised:  PINK – LIVE IN LONDON Seen on Channel 4, MTV, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SIMPLY RED;
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Original:  BBC One.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% MATTHEW BOURNE’S “EDWARD SCISSORHANDS” Live EPK at Sadler’s Wells, London%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% CELINE DION;
Revised:  BBC One.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% CELINE DION;
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE PRODUCERS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the hit West End musical.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the hit West End musical.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE PRODUCERS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the hit West End musical.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE PRODUCERS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips
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Original: Other work THE BT DIGITAL MUSIC AWARDS 2007 5 Programmes for Channel 4 With Natasha Bedingfield, Paul McCartney, Mutya Buena, Kate Nash, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour - “Remember That Night” Launch.
Revised:  THE BT DIGITAL MUSIC AWARDS 2007 5 Programmes for Channel 4 With Natasha Bedingfield, Paul McCartney, Mutya Buena, Kate Nash, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour - “Remember That Night” Launch.
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Original: Other work THE BT DIGITAL MUSIC AWARDS 2007 5 Programmes for Channel 4 With Natasha Bedingfield, Paul McCartney, Mutya Buena, Kate Nash, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour - “Remember That Night” Launch.
Revised: Other work %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour - “Remember That Night” Launch.
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Original:  PINK – LIVE IN LONDON Seen on Channel 4, MTV, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% TERENCE TRENT D’ARBY – INTRODUCING THE HARDLINE LIVE Concert/Documentary in Munich, for Channel 4. SIMPLY RED;
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% TERENCE TRENT D’ARBY – INTRODUCING THE HARDLINE LIVE Concert/Documentary in Munich, for Channel 4. SIMPLY RED;
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Original:  PINK – LIVE IN LONDON Seen on Channel 4, MTV, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% TERENCE TRENT D’ARBY – INTRODUCING THE HARDLINE LIVE Concert/Documentary in Munich, for Channel 4. SIMPLY RED;
Revised:  PINK – LIVE IN LONDON Seen on Channel 4, MTV, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SIMPLY RED;
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Original:  BBC One. MATTHEW BOURNE’S “EDWARD SCISSORHANDS” Live EPK at Sadler’s Wells, London%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% CELINE DION;
Revised:  BBC One. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% CELINE DION;
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Music clips for the show, starring Ewan Macgregor.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE LAST NIGHT OF “CATS” Recorded live at the New London theatre GUYS AND DOLLS Live EPK%DIFDELCMD < & %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips References
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips References
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips References
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips References
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips References
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips References
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% EPK clips References
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE ROCKY HORROR SHOW Music Clips and Live EPK with Richard O’Brien for the 2006 production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bombay Dreams EPK, Music video%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Cinema ad for the hit West End musical%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% David Gilmour “SMILE” / “ON AN ISLAND” Music Videos%DIFDELCMD < & %%% References
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Original:  At the same venue in the following year, Nick directed the massive celebration of the 25th anniversary of " les Miserables" live to cinemas around the world, featuring three complete casts of the show and numerous guest stars from previous performances.
Revised:  At the same venue in the following year, Nick directed the massive celebration of the 25th anniversary of " Les Miserables" live to cinemas around the world, featuring three complete casts of the show and numerous guest stars from previous performances.
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Original:  Since then Nick has directed many multicam recordings of shows shown live or as live in cinemas  most notably “Lazarus”, David Bowie’s last project,”Red”, starring Alfred Molina and the hit west end show “Everybody's Talking About Jamie”.
Revised:  Since then Nick has directed many multicam recordings of shows shown live or as live in cinemas , most notably “Lazarus”, David Bowie’s last project,”Red”, starring Alfred Molina and the hit west end show “Everybody's Talking About Jamie”.
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Original: Closing down schedule 1 April 2004 to 31 March 2005: Group 36 in Bloemfontein and Group 46 in Mthata and seventeen commando were closed down.
Revised: Closing down schedule 1 April 2004 to 31 March 2005: Group 36 in Bloemfontein and Group 46 in Mthata and seventeen commandos were closed down.
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Original:  African: 15134 members White: 32136 members Coloured: 4626 members Asian: 328 members These members were given three options: Demobilise and no longer  a member of the SANDF Join the SAPS as a reservist Join the Army Conventional Reserve regiments if compliant to age and medical criteria and undergo conversion training
Revised:  African: 15134 members White: 32136 members Coloured: 4626 members Asian: 328 members These members were given three options: Demobilise and no longer be a member of the SANDF Join the SAPS as a reservist Join the Army Conventional Reserve regiments if compliant to age and medical criteria and undergo conversion training
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Original: Commando training The Commando System had its own Commando Training School, where skills received from National Service was sharpened.
Revised: Commando training The Commando System had its own Commando Training School, where skills received from National Service were developed or sharpened.
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Original: Catalonia In Catalonia (Spain) , St. George's Day (Diada de Sant Jordi), the patron saint of Catalonia, has been commemorated since 1436, and involves the exchange of gifts between loved ones and respected people.
Revised: Catalonia In Catalonia , St. George's Day (Diada de Sant Jordi), the patron saint of Catalonia, has been commemorated since 1436, and involves the exchange of gifts between loved ones and respected people.
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Original: Catalonia , Spain In Catalonia, St. George's Day (Diada de Sant Jordi), the patron saint of Catalonia, has been commemorated since 1436, and involves the exchange of gifts between loved ones and respected people.
Revised: Catalonia (Autonomous community in Spain) In Catalonia, St. George's Day (Diada de Sant Jordi), the patron saint of Catalonia, has been commemorated since 1436, and involves the exchange of gifts between loved ones and respected people.
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Original: World Book Day, also known as World Book and Copyright Day , or International Day of the Book, is an annual event organized by the United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization (UNESCO) to promote reading, publishing, and copyright.
Revised: World Book Day, also known as World Book and Copyright Day or International Day of the Book, is an annual event organized by the United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization (UNESCO) to promote reading, publishing, and copyright.
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