wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  News agencies have reported that while there has been no claim of responsibility, suspicion will likely fall on the Islamist extremist group .
Revised:  News agencies have reported that while there has been no claim of responsibility, suspicion will likely fall on the extremist group .
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Original:  Nigerian President Goodluck Jonathan described the incident as a "dastardly attack".
Revised:  Nigerian President described the incident as a "dastardly attack".
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Original:  He has already declared a state of emergency in three Northern states, and is facing criticism along with the country's armed forces for their failure to prevent extremist attacks.
Revised:  He has already declared a state of emergency in three northern states, and is facing criticism along with the country's armed forces for their failure to prevent extremist attacks.
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Original: According to official reports, the group were first approached by police in the area of the school  concerned about their unusual activity, before being engaged in a firefight with the attackers .
Revised: According to official reports, police first approached the group in the area of the school concerned about their unusual activity, before being engaged in a firefight with the attackers .
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Original: According to official reports, the group were first approached by police in the area of the school  concerned about their unusual activity, before being engaged in a firefight with the attackers .
Revised: According to official reports, the group were first approached by police in the area of the school , concerned about their unusual activity, before being engaged in a firefight with the attackers .
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Original: According to official reports, the group were first approached by police in the area of the school  concerned about their unusual activity, before being engaged in a firefight with the attackers .
Revised: According to official reports, the group were first approached by police in the area of the school concerned about their unusual activity, before being engaged in a firefight .
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Original:  The attackers were able to gain entry to the building and started throwing bombs.
Revised:  The attackers gained entry to the building and started throwing bombs.
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Original:  The attackers were able to gain entry to the building and started throwing bombs.
Revised:  The attackers were able to gain entry to the school and started throwing bombs.
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Original:  He has already declared a state of emergency in three northern states, and is facing criticism along with the country's armed forces for their failure to prevent extremist attacks.
Revised:  He has already declared a state of emergency in three northern states, and is being criticized along with the country's armed forces for their failure to prevent extremist attacks.
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Original:  He has already declared a state of emergency in three northern states, and is facing criticism along with the country's armed forces for their failure to prevent extremist attacks.
Revised:  He has already declared a state of emergency in three northern states, and is facing criticism along with the country's armed forces for failure to prevent extremist attacks.
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Original: Multiple people are reported to be dead in a bus crash near Phoenix, Arizona early today (local time).
Revised: Multiple people are reported to be dead in a bus crash near Phoenix, Arizona . The
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Original:  Arizona Department of Public Safety stated that  "multiple fatalities and serious injuries" in the incident.
Revised:  Arizona Department of Public Safety stated that there were "multiple fatalities and serious injuries" in the incident.
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Original:  The collision occurred south of Phoenix ( near milepost 173 on Interstate-10).
Revised:  The collision occurred south of Phoenix , near milepost 173 on Interstate-10).
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Original:  The number of deaths was not specified , "multiple" fatalities were mentioned by the former .
Revised:  The number of deaths was not specified .
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Original:  According to fire officials, however, five people have died while seven more are critical
Revised:  According to fire officials, however, five people have died while seven more are in critical condition
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Original:  10 others recieved less severe injure  
Revised:  10 others received less severe injures 
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Original: At least twelve civilians have died and over 25  injured in a suicide bombing in the Hangu district of north-west Pakistan, Thursday night.
Revised: At least twelve civilians have died and over 25 were injured in a suicide bombing in the Hangu district of north-west Pakistan, Thursday night.
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Original:  The victims, among whom some were women, were at a petrol station in Hangu.
Revised:  The victims, some of them women, were at a petrol station in Hangu.
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Original:  According to police, the attacker detonated a bomb in the busfull of passengers .
Revised:  According to police, the attacker detonated a bomb near a fully loaded bus .
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Original:  The Tall-Parachinar road was barred for public in 2008 and 2009 because of Taliban activity.
Revised:  The Tall-Parachinar road was closed to the public in 2008 and 2009 because of Taliban activity.
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Original:  The Tall-Parachinar road was barred for public in 2008 and 2009 because of Taliban activity.
Revised:  The Tall-Parachinar road was barred for public in 2008 and 2009 due to Taliban activity.
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Original:  The road was re-opened about two months ago . Convoys guarded by security forces form a bulk of the traffic.
Revised:  The road was re-opened about two months ago , with convoys guarded by security forces form a bulk of the traffic.
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Original:  The road was re-opened about two months ago . Convoys guarded by security forces form a bulk of the traffic.
Revised:  The road was re-opened about two months ago . Convoys guarded by security forces forming the bulk of the traffic.
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Original: At least twelve civilians have died and over 25 were injured in a suicide bombing in the Hangu district of north-west Pakistan, Thursday night.
Revised: At least twelve civilians have died and over 25 wounded in a suicide bombing in the Hangu district of north-west Pakistan, Thursday night.
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Original: At least twelve civilians have died and over 25 were injured in a suicide bombing in the Hangu district of north-west Pakistan, Thursday night.
Revised: At least twelve civilians have died and over 25 were injured in a suicide bombing in the Hangu District of north-west Pakistan, Thursday night.
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Original:  A convoy of 140 vehicles running from Tall in the Hangu district to Parachinar in the Kurram region was targeted.
Revised:  A convoy of 140 vehicles running from Tall , in Hangu District to the town of Parachinar in Kurram Agency, FATA was targeted.
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Original: 150 searchers from around Southern California searched an area between the park and Lake Hodges.
Revised: About 125 professionally-trained search-and-rescue volunteers combed through an area between the park and Lake Hodges.
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Original:  6,000  volunteers searched areas around North County, coordinated by the Texas-based Laura Recovery Center.
Revised:  6,000 other volunteers searched areas around North County, coordinated by the Texas-based Laura Recovery Center.
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Original: John Albert Gardner III pleaded not guilty Wednesday in San Diego Superior Court to the rape and murder of 17-year-old Poway, California resident Chelsea King . Gardner was arrested Sunday near Lake Hodges in Escondido . King disappeared February 25 while jogging in a park near the lake .
Revised: John Albert Gardner III pleaded not guilty in to the rape and murder of 17-year-old Poway, California resident Chelsea King . Gardner was arrested Sunday near Lake Hodges in Escondido . King disappeared February 25 while jogging in a park near the lake .
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Original: John Albert Gardner III pleaded not guilty Wednesday in San Diego Superior Court to the rape and murder of 17-year-old Poway, California resident Chelsea King . Gardner was arrested Sunday near Lake Hodges in Escondido . King disappeared February 25 while jogging in a park near the lake .
Revised: John Albert Gardner III pleaded not guilty Wednesday in San Diego Superior Court to the rape and murder of 17-year-old Poway, California resident Chelsea King . Gardner was arrested Sunday near Lake Hodges in Escondido . King disappeared February 25 while jogging in a park near Lake Hodges in Escondido .
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Original:  A preliminary hearing  is scheduled for March 18.
Revised:  A preliminary hearing in the case is scheduled for March 18.
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Original:  They executed a plea agreement allowing lesser charges and a shorter sentence  in order to "spare the victim the trauma of testifying".
Revised:  They granted Gardner a plea agreement allowing lesser charges and a shorter sentence in order to "spare the victim the trauma of testifying".
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Original:  They executed a plea agreement allowing lesser charges and a shorter sentence  in order to "spare the victim the trauma of testifying".
Revised:  They executed a plea agreement allowing him to be charged with lesser crimes — and receive a shorter sentence in order to "spare the victim the trauma of testifying".
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Original:  They executed a plea agreement allowing lesser charges and a shorter sentence  in order to "spare the victim the trauma of testifying".
Revised:  They executed a plea agreement allowing lesser charges and a shorter sentence — in order to "spare the victim the trauma of testifying".
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Original:  Chelsea King's parents, Brent and Kelly King, argued today for changes in sex offender laws following their daughter's death.
Revised:  Chelsea King's parents, Brent and Kelly King, are arguing for changes in sex offender laws following their daughter's death.
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Original: Gordon Brown On Friday, the current prime minister of the United Kingdon Gordon Brown defended the decisions he made leading up to and following the British Invasion of Iraq in 2003.
Revised: Gordon Brown On Friday, the current prime minister of the United Kingdom, Gordon Brown defended the decisions he made leading up to and following the British Invasion of Iraq in 2003.
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Original:  However, Brown admitted that he may have been unknowlegable about certain aspects of the war, and hinted that the possibility that things could have been done better.
Revised:  However, Brown admitted that he may have been unknowledgeable about certain aspects of the war, and hinted that the possibility that things could have been done better.
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Original: Brown comments were mainly directs at critics who had alleged that he had limited the spending budget for the war.
Revised: Brown comments were mainly directed at critics who had alleged that he had limited the spending budget for the war.
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Original:  Brown said that he had told then prime minister Tony Blair that he "would not try to rule out any military option on the grounds of cost."
Revised:  Brown said that he had told then Prime Minister Tony Blair that he "would not try to rule out any military option on the grounds of cost."
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Original:  Many people had complained that the vehicles were vulnerable to road side bombs.
Revised:  People had complained that the vehicles were vulnerable to road side bombs.
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Original:  He said that the international community was justified in its invasion.
Revised:  He said the international community was justified in its invasion.
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Original:  However, Brown admitted that he may have been unknowledgeable about certain aspects of the war, and hinted that the possibility that things could have been done better.
Revised:  However, Brown admitted he may have been unknowledgeable about certain aspects of the war, and hinted that the possibility that things could have been done better.
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Original:  Brown also mentioned that he was unaware of doubts that another Cabinet member had about the validity of the evidence that Saddam Hussein was harboring weapons of mass destruction.
Revised:  Brown also mentioned that he was unaware of doubts that another Cabinet member had about the validity of the evidence that Saddam Hussein was harboring weapons of mass destruction.
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Original: On Friday, the current prime minister of the United Kingdom, Gordon Brown defended the decisions he made leading up to and following the British invasion of Iraq in 2003.
Revised: On Friday, the current Prime Minister of the United Kingdom, Gordon Brown defended the decisions he made leading up to and following the British invasion of Iraq in 2003.
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Original:  At the time of the invasion, Brown was the Chancellor of spending for the  Armed Forces.
Revised:  At the time of the invasion, Brown was the Chancellor of spending for the British Armed Forces.
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Original:  Then at around 8 :40 local time (0040 UTC) veterinarians were called to the scene and subdued the tiger.
Revised:  Then at around 08 :40 local time (0040 UTC) veterinarians were called to the scene and subdued the tiger.
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Original:  Then at around 8 :40 local time (0040 UTC) veterinarians were called to the scene and subdued the tiger.
Revised:  Then at around 8 :40 local time (0040 UTC) veterinarians arrived at the scene and subdued the tiger.
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Original: File photo of a Bengal tiger in 2003 A trainer at the Shanghai Zoo was bitten by a Tiger and eventually died Saturday morning.
Revised: File photo of a Bengal tiger in 2003 A trainer at the Shanghai Zoo was bitten by a tiger and later died Saturday morning.
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Original:  Reports say that the found the handler in critical condition inside of the Tigers cage early Saturday.
Revised:  Reports say that handler was found in a critical condition inside of the Tigers cage early Saturday.
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Original:  Reports say that the found the handler in critical condition inside of the Tigers cage early Saturday.
Revised:  Reports say that the found the handler in critical condition inside of the tigers cage early Saturday.
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Original:  Then at around 08:40 local time (0040 UTC) veterinarians arrived at the scene and subdued the tiger.
Revised:  At around 08:40 local time (0040 UTC) veterinarians arrived at the scene and subdued the tiger.
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Original:  One witness said that "Zoo staff said that the tiger didn't have anything to eat the whole day yesterday, it must have been starving ,".
Revised:  One witness said that "Zoo staff said that the tiger didn't have anything to eat the whole day yesterday, it must have been starving ."
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Original: Chicxulub crater In 1980, Louis Alvarez and son, Walter, had published a paper stating that an asteroid had killed the dinosaurs.
Revised:  In 1980, Louis Alvarez and son, Walter, had published a paper stating that an asteroid had killed the dinosaurs.
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Original:  Gravity map of Chicxulub crater The team performed chemical analyses of soil and fossil samples, where a high concentration of iridium (which is commonly found in asteroids and meteors) was found, which dated back to the approximate time of the asteroid crash.
Revised:  The team performed chemical analyses of soil and fossil samples, where a high concentration of iridium (which is commonly found in asteroids and meteors) was found, which dated back to the approximate time of the asteroid crash.
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Original:  Their report was published Friday in the academic journal, Science 
Revised:  Their report was published Friday in the academic journal, Science .
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Original: A group of 41 Paleontologists and researchers reaffirmed the cause of dinosaur extinction.
Revised: A group of 41 paleontologists and researchers reaffirmed the cause of dinosaur extinction.
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Original:  He commented that the gunfight lasted for about three hours, that about sixty NPA rebels were involved in the clash, and that seven of the Filipino troops were injured  
Revised:  He commented that the gunfight lasted for about three hours, that about sixty NPA rebels were involved in the clash, and that seven of the Filipino troops were injured . 
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Original:  Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice has expressed her anger after a meeting with Sudanese President Omar Hassan al-Bashir, during which her aides and staff were mistreated by Sudanese security agents.
Revised: U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice has expressed her anger after a meeting with Sudanese President Omar Hassan al-Bashir, during which her aides and staff were mistreated by Sudanese security agents.
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Original: S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice Source: Wikicommons has expressed her anger after a meeting with Sudanese President Omar Hassan al-Bashir, during which her aides and staff were mistreated by Sudanese security agents.
Revised: S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice Source: Wikicommons has expressed her anger after a meeting with Sudanese President Omar Hassan al-Bashir, during which her aides and staff were mistreated by Sudanese security agents.
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Original:  According to him "anyone we vote for will be bad.  
Revised:  According to him "anyone we vote for will be bad. " 
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Original:  No polling station was targeted   .
Revised:  No polling station was targeted . .
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Original:  The incident occurred just as Iraq's parliamentary election commenced.
Revised:  The incidents occurred just as Iraq's parliamentary election commenced.
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Original:  Insurgents has promised to disrupt the elections by means of violence to show their opposition of America and the Shiite governmentof the country . A group affiliated to al-Qaeda distributed leaflets in the capital advising people against going to vote.
Revised:  Insurgents have promised to disrupt the elections by means of violence to show their opposition of America and the Shiite governmentof the country . A group affiliated to al-Qaeda distributed leaflets in the capital advising people against going to vote.
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Original:  Insurgents has promised to disrupt the elections by means of violence to show their opposition of America and the Shiite governmentof the country . A group affiliated to al-Qaeda distributed leaflets in the capital advising people against going to vote.
Revised:  Insurgents has promised to disrupt the elections by means of violence to show their opposition to America and the Shiite governmentof the country . A group affiliated to al-Qaeda distributed leaflets in the capital advising people against going to vote.
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Original:  Insurgents has promised to disrupt the elections by means of violence to show their opposition of America and the Shiite governmentof the country . A group affiliated to al-Qaeda distributed leaflets in the capital advising people against going to vote.
Revised:  Insurgents has promised to disrupt the elections by means of violence to show their opposition of America and the Shiite-led Iraqi government . A group affiliated to al-Qaeda distributed leaflets in the capital advising people against going to vote.
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Original:  Insurgents has promised to disrupt the elections by means of violence to show their opposition of America and the Shiite governmentof the country . A group affiliated to al-Qaeda distributed leaflets in the capital advising people against going to vote.
Revised:  Insurgents has promised to disrupt the elections by means of violence to show their opposition of America and the Shiite governmentof the country . A group linked to al-Qaeda distributed leaflets in the capital advising people against going to vote.
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Original:  The polling opened at 7 AM (local time) and immediately bombs were detonated and mortar rounds landed throughout the city.
Revised:  Polling opened at 7 AM (local time) and immediately bombs were detonated and mortar rounds landed throughout the city.
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Original:  In Shurta, West Baghdad, twelve were confirmed dead . Rescue workers saved twenty from the debris around a demolished house .
Revised:  In Shurta, West Baghdad, twelve were confirmed dead , and rescue workers saved twenty from the debris around a demolished house .
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Original:  In Shurta, West Baghdad, twelve were confirmed dead . Rescue workers saved twenty from the debris around a demolished house .
Revised:  In Shurta, West Baghdad, twelve were confirmed dead . Rescue workers saved twenty from the debris of a demolished building .
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Original:  The Green Zone, the area that hosts the U.S. Embassy and the prime minister 's office, was also hit by mortar rounds.
Revised:  The Green Zone, the area that hosts the U.S. Embassy and the Prime Minister 's office, was also hit by mortar rounds.
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Original:  No polling station was targeted . Nouri Maliki, the present Prime Minister, urged voters to appear in large numbers in an attempt to boost democracy in the country.
Revised:  No polling stations were hit . Nouri Maliki, the present Prime Minister, urged voters to appear in large numbers in an attempt to boost democracy in the country.
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Original:  No polling station was targeted . Nouri Maliki, the present Prime Minister, urged voters to appear in large numbers in an attempt to boost democracy in the country.
Revised:  No polling station was targeted . Nouri Maliki, the present Prime Minister, called for a strong turnout to boost democracy in the country.
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Original:  To prevent attacks, the border with Iran has been shut down, several troops deployed, and movement of vehicles banned.
Revised:  To prevent attacks, the border with Iran was shut down, several troops deployed, and movement of vehicles banned.
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Original:  To prevent attacks, the border with Iran has been shut down, several troops deployed, and movement of vehicles banned.
Revised:  To prevent attacks, the border with Iran has been shut down, several troops deployed, and movement of 
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Original:  The banning of unauthorized vehicles made the city 's roads almost empty.
Revised:  unauthorized vehicles banned, leaving Baghdad 's roads almost empty.
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Original:  Despite this, in Baghdad, small bands of people continued to venture out to the polls.
Revised:  Despite this, people continued to venture out to the polls.
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Original:  Despite this, in Baghdad, small bands of people continued to venture out to the polls.
Revised:  Despite this, in Baghdad, small bands of people continued to head to the polls.
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Original:  On Saturday, a car bomb detonated near a parking lot used by pilgrims in the Shiite holy city or Najaf, killed three.
Revised:  On Saturday, a car bomb detonated near a parking lot used by pilgrims in the Shiite holy city of Najaf, killed three.
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Original:  54 people were wounded  of whom 19 were Iranians
Revised:  54 people were wounded , of whom 19 were Iranians
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Original: At least 24 people died today  in Baghdad as dozens of mortars were fired throughout the city, destroying at least two buildings .
Revised: At least 24 people died today LAWL in Baghdad as dozens of mortars were fired throughout the city, destroying at least two buildings .
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