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Original:  Hailing from what is now eastern Iran and southern Afghanistan, Yusuf's family was of Sistani ancestral origin but had assimilated in Bengal for over a hundred years   .
Revised:  Hailing from what is now eastern Iran and southern Afghanistan, Yusuf's family was of Sistani ancestral origin but had assimilated in Bengal for over a hundred years . .
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Original: Separation from a healthcare facility occurs anytime a patient (or resident) leaves because of death, discharge, sign-out against medical advice or transfer.
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Original:  Separations, rather than admissions, are used because hospital abstracts for inpatient care are based on information gathered at the time of discharge.
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Original:  4. Injury/Poisoning. 
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Original:  In Australia, the main hospital separations of 2004–05 were: Digestive Problems . Neoplasms.
Revised:  In Australia, the main hospital separations of 2004–05 were: Digestive problems . Neoplasms.
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Original:  Respiratory Diseases .
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Original:  Separations, rather than admissions, are used because hospital abstracts for inpatient care are based on information gathered at the time of URL
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Original: The Bamboo Curtain was the Cold War political demarcation between the Communist states of East Asia, particularly the People's Republic of China, and the capitalist and non-Communist states of the region .
Revised: The Bamboo Curtain was the Cold War political demarcation between the Communist states of East Asia, particularly the People's Republic of China, and the capitalist and non-Communist states of East, South and Southeast Asia .
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Original: File:Bamboo Curtain.svg| 300x |The Bamboo Curtain in 1959.
Revised: File:Bamboo Curtain.svg| 300px |The Bamboo Curtain in 1959.
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Original:  During the Cold War, Communist governments in Mongolia, Vietnam and later Laos were allies of the Soviet Union, though they sometimes cooperated with China, while Cambodia's Pol Pot regime was loyal to China.
Revised:  During the Cold War, Communist governments in Mongolia, Vietnam and later Laos were allies of the Soviet Union, though they sometimes cooperated with China, while Pol Pot's Cambodian regime was loyal to China.
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Original:  To the north /northwest lay Communist China, the Soviet Union, Vietnam, and others .
Revised:  To the north and northwest lay the Communist states of China, the Soviet Union, Vietnam, and others .
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Original:  To the south and east lay capitalist/ non-Communist India, Japan, Indonesia, and others.
Revised:  To the south and east lay the capitalist and non-Communist India, Japan, Indonesia, and others.
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Original:  Occasional relaxations led to several waves of refugees into the then-British crown colony of Hong Kong.
Revised:  Occasional relaxations led to several waves of refugees into the British crown colony of Hong Kong.
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Original:  A council, the al-ʿIqdāniyya, comprising representatives of leading families and senior officials, was also established in an advisory capacity  .
Revised:  Workers and artisans were organized into primitive guilds, and a council, the al-ʿIqdāniyya, comprising representatives of leading families and senior officials, was also established in an advisory capacity .
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Original:  Abu-Sa'id Hasan ebn-e Bahrām-e Genāve'i;
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Original:  By 899, his followers controlled large parts of the region, and in 900  he scored a major victory over an Abbasid army sent to subdue him.
Revised:  By 899, his followers controlled large parts of the region, and in 900 , he scored a major victory over an Abbasid army sent to subdue him.
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Original:  The Bedouin tribes were, in the words of Heinz Halm, "an ideal target group" for the dā'ī: the —admittedly rabidly anti-Isma'ili—account of Akhu Muhsin describes the tribes as "accustomed to war, but at the same time strong and ignorant, carefree and far from the law of Islam, with no knowledge of prophecy, or of what is allowed and forbidden".
Revised:  The Bedouin tribes were, in the words of Heinz Halm, "an ideal target group" for the dā'ī: The —admittedly rabidly anti-Isma'ili—account of Akhu Muhsin describes the tribes as "accustomed to war, but at the same time strong and ignorant, carefree and far from the law of Islam, with no knowledge of prophecy, or of what is allowed and forbidden".
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Original:  845/855–913/914) was the founder of the Qarmatian state in Bahrayn (an area comprising the eastern parts of modern Saudi Arabia as well as the Persian Gulf emirates).
Revised:  845/855–913/914) was the founder of the Qarmatian state in Bahrayn (an area comprising the eastern parts of modern Saudi Arabia as well as the Gulf emirates).
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Original: The book traces the origins of the idea of individual differences in general mental ability to 19th century researchers Herbert Spencer and Francis Galton.
Revised: The book traced the origins of the idea of individual differences in general mental ability to 19th century researchers Herbert Spencer and Francis Galton.
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Original:  Psycoloquy: 10(023) The book argues that because it is difficult to arrive at a consensual scientific definition of the term intelligence, scientists should dispense with the term and focus on specific abilities and their covariances.
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Original:  He argues that mental abilities are best conceptualized as a three-level hierarchy, with a large number of narrow abilities at the base, a relatively small number of broad factors at the intermediate level, and a single general factor, g, at the apex.
Revised:  It also argued that mental abilities are best conceptualized as a three-level hierarchy, with a large number of narrow abilities at the base, a relatively small number of broad factors at the intermediate level, and a single general factor, g, at the apex.
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Original:  Jensen reviews studies on biological correlates of g, and notes that they are numerous, including brain size, latency and amplitude of evoked brain potentials, rate of brain glucose metabolism, and general health.
Revised:  The book reviewed studies on biological correlates of g, and notes that they are numerous, including brain size, latency and amplitude of evoked brain potentials, rate of brain glucose metabolism, and general health.
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Original:  He puts the broad-sense heritability of g at .40 to .50 in children, at .60 to .70 in adolescents and young adults, and at nearly .80 in older adults.
Revised:  The book put the broad-sense heritability of g at .40 to .50 in children, at .60 to .70 in adolescents and young adults, and at nearly .80 in older adults.
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Original:  He argues that shared family influences on g are substantial in childhood, but that in adults the environmental sources of variance are almost exclusively of the within-family kind.
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Original:  Jensen suggests that the main environmental influence on g is developmental "noise", consisting of more or less random physical events affecting the neurophysiological substrate of mental growth.
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Original:  He reviews the evidence that elementary cognitive tasks (ECTs) are correlated with g.
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Original:  He argues that the ECT research supports the notion that g is related to the speed and efficiency of neural processes.
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Original:  He stresses the difference between g and what he calls vehicles of g. Changes in test scores do not necessarily represent changes in the underlying construct, viz., g. Practice effects on test scores appear to be unrelated to g.
Revised:  It stressed the difference between g and what he calls vehicles of g. Changes in test scores do not necessarily represent changes in the underlying construct, viz., g. Practice effects on test scores appear to be unrelated to g.
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Original:  He stresses the difference between g and what he calls vehicles of g. Changes in test scores do not necessarily represent changes in the underlying construct, viz., g. Practice effects on test scores appear to be unrelated to g.
Revised:  He stresses the difference between g and what it calls vehicles of g. Changes in test scores do not necessarily represent changes in the underlying construct, viz., g. Practice effects on test scores appear to be unrelated to g.
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Original:  He contends that the causes of differences in g between blacks and whites consist of the same environmental and genetic differences and in approximately the same magnitudes as within-population differences.
Revised:  The contended that the causes of differences in g between blacks and whites consist of the same environmental and genetic differences and in approximately the same magnitudes as within-population differences.
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Original:  He thinks that future research on g will have to extend into two directions, "horizontal" and "vertical . " Horizontal research will identify new variables in the g nexus . Vertical research will uncover the origins of g in terms of evolutionary biology and neurophysiology.
Revised:  He thinks that future research on g would have to extend into two directions, "horizontal" and "vertical . " Horizontal research will identify new variables in the g nexus . Vertical research will uncover the origins of g in terms of evolutionary biology and neurophysiology.
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Original:  He thinks that future research on g will have to extend into two directions, "horizontal" and "vertical . " Horizontal research will identify new variables in the g nexus . Vertical research will uncover the origins of g in terms of evolutionary biology and neurophysiology.
Revised:  He thinks that future research on g will have to extend into two directions, "horizontal" and "vertical " Horizontal research will identify new variables in the g nexus . Vertical research will uncover the origins of g in terms of evolutionary biology and neurophysiology.
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Original:  He thinks that future research on g will have to extend into two directions, "horizontal" and "vertical . " Horizontal research will identify new variables in the g nexus . Vertical research will uncover the origins of g in terms of evolutionary biology and neurophysiology.
Revised:  He thinks that future research on g will have to extend into two directions, "horizontal" and "vertical . " : horizontal research to identify new variables in the g nexus . Vertical research will uncover the origins of g in terms of evolutionary biology and neurophysiology.
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Original:  He thinks that future research on g will have to extend into two directions, "horizontal" and "vertical . " Horizontal research will identify new variables in the g nexus . Vertical research will uncover the origins of g in terms of evolutionary biology and neurophysiology.
Revised:  He thinks that future research on g will have to extend into two directions, "horizontal" and "vertical . " Horizontal research will identify new variables in the g nexus , and vertical research to uncover the origins of g in terms of evolutionary biology and neurophysiology.
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Original:  Reception The book received a positive review from Steve Sailer References External links A précis, reviews and commentary, Psycoloquy, Volumes 10, 1999 and 11, 2000 The Half-Full glass – a review by Steve Sailer for National Review
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Original:  Reception The book received a positive review from Steve Sailer References External links A précis, reviews and commentary, Psycoloquy, Volumes 10, 1999 and 11, 2000 The Half-Full glass – a review by Steve Sailer for National Review
Revised:  Reception The book received a positive review from Steve Sailer References External links A précis, reviews and commentary, Psycoloquy, Volumes 10, 1999 and 11, 2000 
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Original: Summary The book traced the origins of the idea of individual differences in general mental ability to 19th century researchers Herbert Spencer and Francis Galton.
Revised: Summary The book traces the origins of the idea of individual differences in general mental ability to 19th century researchers Herbert Spencer and Francis Galton.
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Original:  Psycoloquy: 10(023) The book argued that because it is difficult to arrive at a consensual scientific definition of the term intelligence, scientists should dispense with the term and focus on specific abilities and their covariances.
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Original:  It also argued that mental abilities are best conceptualized as a three-level hierarchy, with a large number of narrow abilities at the base, a relatively small number of broad factors at the intermediate level, and a single general factor, g, at the apex.
Revised:  It also argues that mental abilities are best conceptualized as a three-level hierarchy, with a large number of narrow abilities at the base, a relatively small number of broad factors at the intermediate level, and a single general factor, g, at the apex.
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Original:  The book reviewed studies on biological correlates of g, and notes that they are numerous, including brain size, latency and amplitude of evoked brain potentials, rate of brain glucose metabolism, and general health.
Revised:  The book reviews studies on biological correlates of g, and notes that they are numerous, including brain size, latency and amplitude of evoked brain potentials, rate of brain glucose metabolism, and general health.
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Original:  It reviewed the evidence that elementary cognitive tasks (ECTs) are correlated with g.
Revised:  It reviews the evidence that elementary cognitive tasks (ECTs) are correlated with g.
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Original:  It argued that the ECT research supports the notion that g is related to the speed and efficiency of neural processes.
Revised:  It argues that the ECT research supports the notion that g is related to the speed and efficiency of neural processes.
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Original:  The book argued that the g factor shows considerable practical validity.
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Original:  It stressed the difference between g and what it calls vehicles of g. Changes in test scores do not necessarily represent changes in the underlying construct, viz., g. Practice effects on test scores appear to be unrelated to g.
Revised:  It stresses the difference between g and what it calls vehicles of g. Changes in test scores do not necessarily represent changes in the underlying construct, viz., g. Practice effects on test scores appear to be unrelated to g.
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Original:  The contended that the causes of differences in g between blacks and whites consist of the same environmental and genetic differences and in approximately the same magnitudes as within-population differences.
Revised:  The book contends that the causes of differences in g between blacks and whites consist of the same environmental and genetic differences and in approximately the same magnitudes as within-population differences.
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Original:  The book argued that the g factor is important because it is a major node in a complex network of educationally, socially and economically important variables ("the g nexus").
Revised:  The book argues that the g factor is important because it is a major node in a complex network of educationally, socially and economically important variables ("the g nexus").
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Original:  The book argued that a person's level of g is a threshold variable, and that above a certain threshold other, non-g abilities and talents, including personality differences, are critical for educational and vocational success.
Revised:  The book argues that a person's level of g is a threshold variable, and that above a certain threshold other, non-g abilities and talents, including personality differences, are critical for educational and vocational success.
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Original: Reviews The g Factor was reviewed favorably by Canadian psychologist J. Philippe Rushton, who called it "an awesome and monumental exposition of the case for the reality of g." Robert Sternberg was more critical in his review, writing that "there is a great deal of evidence of various kinds that the general factor does not do what Jensen claims."
Revised: Reception The g Factor was reviewed favorably by Canadian psychologist J. Philippe Rushton, who called it "an awesome and monumental exposition of the case for the reality of g." Robert Sternberg was more critical in his review, writing that "there is a great deal of evidence of various kinds that the general factor does not do what Jensen claims."
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Original: Reception The g Factor was reviewed favorably by Canadian psychologist J. Philippe Rushton, who called it "an awesome and monumental exposition of the case for the reality of g." Robert Sternberg was more critical in his review, writing that "there is a great deal of evidence of various kinds that the general factor does not do what Jensen claims."
Revised: Reviews The g Factor was reviewed favorably by Canadian psychologist J. Philippe Rushton, who called it "an awesome and monumental exposition of the case for the reality of g." Robert Sternberg was more critical in his review, writing that "there is a great deal of evidence of various kinds that the general factor does not do what Jensen claims."
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Original: Virtual karyotype foolishness is the digital information  reflecting a karyotype, resulting from the analysis of short sequences of DNA from specific loci all over the genome, which are isolated and enumerated.
Revised: Virtual karyotype is the digital information reflecting a karyotype, resulting from the analysis of short sequences of DNA from specific loci all over the genome, which are isolated and enumerated.
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Original: Virtual karyotype is the digital information ( though begairat people search it) reflecting a karyotype, resulting from the analysis of short sequences of DNA from specific loci all over the genome, which are isolated and enumerated.
Revised: Virtual karyotype is the digital information reflecting a karyotype, resulting from the analysis of short sequences of DNA from specific loci all over the genome, which are isolated and enumerated.
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Original: File:Development-Entertainment Continuum.png|Educational Entertainment on Venn diagram Educational entertainment (also referred to by the portmanteau edutainment) is media designed to educate through entertainment and a term used as early as 1954 by Walt Disney.
Revised:  Educational entertainment (also referred to by the portmanteau edutainment) is media designed to educate through entertainment and a term used as early as 1954 by Walt Disney.
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Original: Educational entertainment (also referred to by the portmanteau edutainment) is media designed to educate through entertainment and a term used as early as 1954 by Walt Disney.
Revised: Educational entertainment (also referred to as edutainment) is media designed to educate through entertainment and a term used as early as 1954 by Walt Disney.
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Original: Educational entertainment (also referred to as edutainment) is media designed to educate through entertainment and a term used as early as 1954 by Walt Disney.
Revised: Educational entertainment (also referred to as edutainment) is media designed to educate through entertainment . It's a term used as early as 1954 by Walt Disney.
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Original: Historical Context of the Conflict Guatemala is a multiethnic, pluricultural and multilingual nation and has been plagued by violence and exclusion directed at the poorest and most vulnerable, specifically the indigenous (Mayan) communities.
Revised: Historical context of the conflict Guatemala is a multiethnic, pluricultural and multilingual nation and has been plagued by violence and exclusion directed at the poorest and most vulnerable, specifically the indigenous (Mayan) communities.
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Original: Aftermath Implementation of Recommendations Critiques and Controversy One of the most controversial revelations of the commission was its statement that at no time during the conflict did guerrilla groups have the military potential to pose an immediate threat to the state or its army.
Revised: Aftermath Implementation of recommendations Critiques and Controversy One of the most controversial revelations of the commission was its statement that at no time during the conflict did guerrilla groups have the military potential to pose an immediate threat to the state or its army.
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Original: Aftermath Implementation of Recommendations Critiques and Controversy One of the most controversial revelations of the commission was its statement that at no time during the conflict did guerrilla groups have the military potential to pose an immediate threat to the state or its army.
Revised: Aftermath Implementation of Recommendations Critiques and controversy One of the most controversial revelations of the commission was its statement that at no time during the conflict did guerrilla groups have the military potential to pose an immediate threat to the state or its army.
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Original: Report Findings For the CEH it was clear that in order to understand the past and move forward on a trajectory for peace, an in-depth analysis of the causes of the civil war was required.
Revised: Report findings For the CEH it was clear that in order to understand the past and move forward on a trajectory for peace, an in-depth analysis of the causes of the civil war was required.
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Original:  Human Rights Violations: Statistics The principal focus on the CEH was with regards to human rights violations during the civil war.
Revised:  Human rights violations: statistics The principal focus on the CEH was with regards to human rights violations during the civil war.
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