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Original:  Nevertheless, at 22:45 local time (02:45 UTC on Friday), Congress resumed the session, accepted for unanimity the renunciation of Mesa  and named Rodriguez Veltzé, a 49-year-old lawyer from Cochabamba, as the new temporary president of the country, after Vaca Diez and Cossio declined their rights of succession.
Revised:  Nevertheless, at 22:45 local time (02:45 UTC on Friday), Congress resumed the session, accepted unanimously the renunciation of Mesa and named Rodriguez Veltzé, a 49-year-old lawyer from Cochabamba, as the new temporary president of the country, after Vaca Diez and Cossio declined their rights of succession.
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Original:  Nevertheless, at 22:45 local time (02:45 UTC on Friday), Congress resumed the session, accepted for unanimity the renunciation of Mesa  and named Rodriguez Veltzé, a 49-year-old lawyer from Cochabamba, as the new temporary president of the country, after Vaca Diez and Cossio declined their rights of succession.
Revised:  Nevertheless, at 22:45 local time (02:45 UTC on Friday), Congress resumed the session, accepted for unanimity the renunciation of Mesa , and named Rodriguez Veltzé, a 49-year-old lawyer from Cochabamba, as the new temporary president of the country, after Vaca Diez and Cossio declined their rights of succession.
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Original:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and Vaca Diez, had announced previously to be in favor to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although he wants a constitutional assembly, probably he desists as the temporary president complies his promise to call anticipated polls, maybe next December.
Revised:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and Vaca Diez, has previusly endorsed the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although he wants a constitutional assembly, probably he desists as the temporary president complies his promise to call anticipated polls, maybe next December.
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Original:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and Vaca Diez, had announced previously to be in favor to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although he wants a constitutional assembly, probably he desists as the temporary president complies his promise to call anticipated polls, maybe next December.
Revised:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and Vaca Diez, had announced previously to be in favor to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although he wants a constitutional assembly, probably desists as the temporary president complies his promise to call anticipated polls, maybe next December.
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Original:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and Vaca Diez, had announced previously to be in favor to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although he wants a constitutional assembly, probably he desists as the temporary president complies his promise to call anticipated polls, maybe next December.
Revised:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and Vaca Diez, had announced previously to be in favor to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although he wants a constitutional assembly, probably he desists as the temporary president fulfills his promise to call anticipated polls, maybe next December.
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Original:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and Vaca Diez, had announced previously to be in favor to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although he wants a constitutional assembly, probably he desists as the temporary president complies his promise to call anticipated polls, maybe next December.
Revised:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and Vaca Diez, had announced previously to be in favor to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although he wants a constitutional assembly, probably he desists as the temporary president complies his promise to call anticipated polls, possibly next December.
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Original:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution obliges to the temporary president only to call assemblies for president and vice president
Revised:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution only obliges the temporary president only to call assemblies for president and vice president
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Original:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution obliges to the temporary president only to call assemblies for president and vice president
Revised:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution obliges to the temporary president to call assemblies for president and vice president
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Original: A coronary angiogram A recent study found that only 44\% of patients who undergo an elective heart surgery take ]]  the recommended test to determine whether the procedure is necessary .
Revised: A coronary angiogram A recent study found that only 44\% of patients who undergo an elective heart surgery called ]] the recommended test to determine whether the procedure is necessary .
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Original: A coronary angiogram A recent study found that only 44\% of patients who undergo an elective heart surgery take ]]  the recommended test to determine whether the procedure is necessary .
Revised: A coronary angiogram A recent study found that only 44\% of patients who undergo an elective heart surgery take ]] the recommended test to determine whether the procedure is appropriate .
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Original:  The operation , known as angioplasty, opens partially clogged arteries in patients with heart disease .
Revised:  The operation opens partially clogged arteries in patients with heart disease .
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Original:  According to a story in Reuters, the cost of these operations has been a significant cause of the rise in Medicare expenditures since the mid-1990s.
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Original:  Although not all patients who need angioplasty are strong enough to undergo the stress test, University of California, San Francisco researchers were surprised that testing preceded so few of the surgeries.
Revised:  Although not all patients who need angioplasty are strong enough to undergo the stress test, UC San Francisco researchers were surprised that testing preceded so few of the surgeries.
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Original: Angioplasties are currently being performed at a rate of over 800,000 per year in the United States .
Revised: Angioplasties are currently being performed at a rate of over 800,000 per year in the U.S .
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Original:  Dr. Redberg coauthored a report on the findings for the Journal of the American Medical Association this month.
Revised:  Dr. Redberg co-authored a report on the findings for the Journal of the American Medical Association this month.
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Original:  Another coauthor of the study, Dr. Grace Lin noted, "What really matters is whether or not that blockage is affecting blood flow to the heart.
Revised:  Dr. Grace Lin noted, "What really matters is whether or not that blockage is affecting blood flow to the heart.
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Original:  Another cardiologist , Dr. Anthony DeFranco of Aurora St.
Revised:  Cardiologist , Dr. Anthony DeFranco of Aurora St.
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Original:  "The reality is that the next president will be inheriting a fiscal and economic mess of historic proportions," said Conrad, adding that "it will take years to dig our way out"  
Revised:  "The reality is that the next president will be inheriting a fiscal and economic mess of historic proportions," said Conrad, adding that "it will take years to dig our way out" . 
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Original:  "The resulting debt will be passed to our children and grandchildren.  
Revised:  "The resulting debt will be passed to our children and grandchildren. " 
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Original:  Financial experts believe that next year the deficit will reach over $ 700 billion, while the National Debt Clock has recently run out of digits to record the over $10 trillion in national debt.
Revised:  Financial experts believe that next year the deficit will reach over $ 700 billion, while the National Debt Clock has recently run out of digits to record over $10 trillion in national debt.
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Original:  The deficit is now equivalent to 3.2\% of the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of the United States, with the governments total income being 17.8\% of GDP, and total outlays being equivalent to 21\% of GDP.
Revised:  The deficit is now equivalent to 3.2\% of the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) of the United States, with the government's total income being 17.8\% of GDP, and total outlays being equivalent to 21\% of GDP.
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Original:  Teasury Secretary Henry Paulson blamed the deficit on the housing market, related markets, and slow growth.
Revised:  Treasury Secretary Henry Paulson blamed the deficit on the housing market, related markets, and slow growth.
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Original:  "The bipartisan stimulus bill and the sloweconomy are the primary reasons for the increase in deficit asreflected in this year's budget results.
Revised:  "The bipartisan stimulus bill and the slow economy are the primary reasons for the increase in deficit asreflected in this year's budget results.
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Original:  "The bipartisan stimulus bill and the sloweconomy are the primary reasons for the increase in deficit asreflected in this year's budget results.
Revised:  "The bipartisan stimulus bill and the sloweconomy are the primary reasons for the increase in deficit as reflected in this year's budget results.
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Original:  This increase reinforcesthe need to adopt and maintain policies that promote economic growthand fiscal responsibility, including entitlement reform andpro-growth tax policies.
Revised:  This increase reinforces the need to adopt and maintain policies that promote economic growthand fiscal responsibility, including entitlement reform andpro-growth tax policies.
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Original:  This increase reinforcesthe need to adopt and maintain policies that promote economic growthand fiscal responsibility, including entitlement reform andpro-growth tax policies.
Revised:  This increase reinforcesthe need to adopt and maintain policies that promote economic growth and fiscal responsibility, including entitlement reform andpro-growth tax policies.
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Original:  This increase reinforcesthe need to adopt and maintain policies that promote economic growthand fiscal responsibility, including entitlement reform andpro-growth tax policies.
Revised:  This increase reinforcesthe need to adopt and maintain policies that promote economic growthand fiscal responsibility, including entitlement reform and pro-growth tax policies.
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Original:  I am confident the economy can return tostronger growth with a declining deficit - after working throughcurrent challenges - if Congress limits wasteful and excessivespending .
Revised:  I am confident the economy can return to stronger growth with a declining deficit - after working throughcurrent challenges - if Congress limits wasteful and excessivespending .
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Original:  I am confident the economy can return tostronger growth with a declining deficit - after working throughcurrent challenges - if Congress limits wasteful and excessivespending .
Revised:  I am confident the economy can return tostronger growth with a declining deficit - after working through current challenges - if Congress limits wasteful and excessivespending .
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Original:  I am confident the economy can return tostronger growth with a declining deficit - after working throughcurrent challenges - if Congress limits wasteful and excessivespending .
Revised:  I am confident the economy can return tostronger growth with a declining deficit - after working throughcurrent challenges - if Congress limits wasteful and excessive spending .
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Original: Democrats like Senate Budget Committee Chairman Kent Conrad, however, placed the blame on "President Bush's failed policies".
Revised: Democrats like Senator Kent Conrad, however, placed the blame on "President Bush's failed policies".
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Original:  Jim Nussie , director of the Office of Management and Budget said that he believes that the deficit will start to decline.
Revised:  Jim Nussle , director of the Office of Management and Budget said that he believes that the deficit will start to decline.
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Original:  I am confident the economy can return to stronger growth with a declining deficit - after working through current challenges - if Congress limits wasteful and excessive spending.
Revised:  I am confident the economy can return to stronger growth with a declining deficit — after working through current challenges - if Congress limits wasteful and excessive spending.
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Original:  I am confident the economy can return to stronger growth with a declining deficit - after working through current challenges - if Congress limits wasteful and excessive spending.
Revised:  I am confident the economy can return to stronger growth with a declining deficit - after working through current challenges if Congress limits wasteful and excessive spending.
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Original:  Armed forces supreme commander, General Boonsrang Niempradithad called for Thaksin to receive justice , quote: " Sometimes, justice involves meting out punishment as well , " 
Revised:  Armed forces supreme commander, General Boonsrang Niempradithad called for Thaksin to receive justice , quote: " Sometimes, justice involves meting out punishment as well " 
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Original:  His holdings in a telecoms company which does business with the state are allegedly in contravention of several constitutional articles . Related new
Revised:  His holdings in a telecoms company which does business with the state are allegedly in contravention of several constitutional articles Related new
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Original:  His holdings in a telecoms company which does business with the state are allegedly in contravention of several constitutional articles . Related new
Revised:  His holdings in a telecoms company which does business with the state are allegedly in contravention of several constitutional articles . 
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Original:  Boonsrang asserted the prime minister must, dispense justice to everyone . Ensuring justice does not necessarily mean offering assistance.
Revised:  Boonsrang asserted the prime minister must, dispense justice to everyone , "ensuring justice does not necessarily mean offering assistance.
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Original:  Boonsrang asserted the prime minister must,  dispense justice to everyone, " ensuring justice does not necessarily mean offering assistance.
Revised:  Boonsrang asserted the prime minister must, " dispense justice to everyone, " ensuring justice does not necessarily mean offering assistance.
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Original:  Boonsrang asserted the prime minister must,  dispense justice to everyone, " ensuring justice does not necessarily mean offering assistance.
Revised:  Boonsrang asserted the prime minister must, dispense justice to everyone, ensuring justice does not necessarily mean offering assistance.
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Original:  a move that is estimated to have cost the country 's exchequer 40 billion baht ($1.2 billion).
Revised:  a move that is estimated to have cost the country 40 billion baht ($1.2 billion).
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Original: Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 ]] Today sees a sixth arrest warrant issued for Thailand's deposed premier, Thaksin Shinawatra.
Revised: Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 ]] Today sees a sixth arrest warrant for Thailand's deposed premier, Thaksin Shinawatra.
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Original:  The warrant , issued by the Supreme Court, is over Thaksin's failure to appear in court on charges relating to conversion of concession payments in the country's lucrative telecoms market to excise tax during 2003;
Revised:  The warrant is over Thaksin's failure to appear in court on charges relating to conversion of concession payments in the country's lucrative telecoms market to excise tax during 2003;
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Original:  a move that is estimated to have cost the country's exchequer 40 billion baht (  $1.2 billion).
Revised:  a move that is estimated to have cost the country's exchequer 40 billion baht ( US $1.2 billion).
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Original:  Next Tuesday sees the trial over the Ratchadaphisek land case again come before the Supreme Court - this time with a verdict possibly to be read.
Revised:  Next Tuesday , will see the trial over the Ratchadaphisek land case again come before the Supreme Court - this time with a verdict possibly to be read.
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Original:  Next Tuesday sees the trial over the Ratchadaphisek land case again come before the Supreme Court - this time with a verdict possibly to be read.
Revised:  Next Tuesday sees the trial over the Ratchadaphisek land case again come before the Supreme Court — this time with a verdict possibly to be read.
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Original:  Last month  saw other warrants issued against Thaksin, in relation to the country's numbers lottery.
Revised:  Last month , saw other warrants issued against Thaksin, in relation to the country's numbers lottery.
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Original: 14 years old childreb in Britain are no longer subject to compulsary testing The UK Government has stated that children in Britain will no longer be required to take compulsary , externally marked tests at the age of fourteen.
Revised: 14 years old children in Britain are no longer subject to compulsary testing The UK Government has stated that children in Britain will no longer be required to take compulsary , externally marked tests at the age of fourteen.
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Original: 14 years old childreb in Britain are no longer subject to compulsary testing The UK Government has stated that children in Britain will no longer be required to take compulsary , externally marked tests at the age of fourteen.
Revised: 14 years old childreb in Britain are no longer subject to compulsory testing The UK Government has stated that children in Britain will no longer be required to take compulsary , externally marked tests at the age of fourteen.
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Original: 14 years old childreb in Britain are no longer subject to compulsary testing The UK Government has stated that children in Britain will no longer be required to take compulsary , externally marked tests at the age of fourteen.
Revised: 14 years old childreb in Britain are no longer subject to compulsary testing The UK Government has stated that children in Britain will no longer be required to take compulsory , externally marked tests at the age of fourteen.
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Original:  The change takes effect immediately, meaning that people whop were due to take the test this year no longer have to do so.
Revised:  The change takes effect immediately, meaning that people who were due to take the test this year no longer have to do so.
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Original:  Instead of league tables showing test results, the govenrment will produce report cards for secondary schools.
Revised:  Instead of league tables showing test results, the government will produce report cards for secondary schools.
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Original:  According to Christine Blower, acting general secretary of the National Union of Teachers, the government is admintting that the previous test system failed by making this move.
Revised:  According to Christine Blower, acting general secretary of the National Union of Teachers, the government is admitting that the previous test system failed by making this move.
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Original:  Michael Gove, an MP for the Conservative Party that serves as shadow childrens secretary, stated that his party have "argued for fewer national tests and more rigour and we want to work constructively to improve the assessment and qualifications regime."
Revised:  Michael Gove, an MP for the Conservative Party that serves as shadow children's secretary, stated that his party have "argued for fewer national tests and more rigour and we want to work constructively to improve the assessment and qualifications regime."
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Original:  Michael Gove, an MP for the Conservative Party that serves as shadow childrens secretary, stated that his party have "argued for fewer national tests and more rigour and we want to work constructively to improve the assessment and qualifications regime."
Revised:  Michael Gove, an MP for the Conservative Party that serves as shadow childrens secretary, stated that his party have "argued for fewer national tests and more rigor and we want to work constructively to improve the assessment and qualifications regime."
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Original:  David Laws, childrens spokesperson for the Liberal Democrats, said that "the Sats tests taken by 14-year-olds are not only a waste of time but have been highly unreliable over the last few years.
Revised:  David Laws, children's spokesperson for the Liberal Democrats, said that "the Sats tests taken by 14-year-olds are not only a waste of time but have been highly unreliable over the last few years.
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Original: The tests for seven and eleven year old , however, are not being abolished.
Revised: The tests for seven and eleven year olds , however, are not being abolished.
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Original: 14 years old children in Britain are no longer subject to compulsory testing The UK Government has stated that children in Britain will no longer be required to take compulsory, externally marked tests at the age of fourteen.
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Original:  The change takes effect immediately, meaning that people who were due to take the test this year no longer have to do so.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Education secretary Ed Balls yesterday announced his plans to radically change the UK testing system yesterday, in parliament.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The decision to abolish the tests for fourteen year olds came as a result of a situation earlier this year, when there were long delays with the delivery of test results to students of this age.
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Original:  According to Christine Blower, acting general secretary of the National Union of Teachers, the government is admitting that the previous test system failed by making this move.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "For too long English, mathematics and science teachers in secondary schools have found themselves skewing everything to enable their pupils to jump through a series of unnecessary hoops," she claimed, while Chris Keates, general secretary of the National Association of Schoolmasters Union of Women Teachers, said that "the sound of a deep collective sigh of relief will emanate from secondary schools across the country."
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Original:  A review group is being set up, however, to research the effect of these tests on eleven years olds .
Revised:  A review group is being set up, however, to research the effect of these tests on eleven-year-olds .
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Original:  David Laws, children's spokesperson for the Liberal Democrats, said that "the SAT (Standardized Assessment Task) tests taken by 14-year-olds are not only a waste of time but have been highly unreliable over the last few years.
Revised:  David Laws, children's spokesperson for the Liberal Democrats, said that "the Sats tests taken by 14-year-olds are not only a waste of time but have been highly unreliable over the last few years.
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