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Original:  However over the past three days has seen up to 50 rockets fired and also Israeli operations in Gaza.
Revised:  However the past three days has seen up to 50 rockets fired and also Israeli operations in Gaza.
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Original:  However over the past three days has seen up to 50 rockets fired and also Israeli operations in Gaza.
Revised:  However over the past three days have seen up to 50 rockets fired and also Israeli operations in Gaza.
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Original:  However over the past three days has seen up to 50 rockets fired and also Israeli operations in Gaza.
Revised:  However over the past three days has seen up to 50 rockets fired , and Israeli operations in Gaza.
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Original:  A passing shp rescued the 19 others, while a coast guard rescue boat itself required rescue in strong waves in the region after getting into difficulties before losing contact   
Revised:  A passing shp rescued the 19 others, while a coast guard rescue boat itself required rescue in strong waves in the region after getting into difficulties before losing contact . 
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Original: The Coast Guard reported yeaterday that a cargo ship laden with cement sank overnight in the Philippines, killing the vessel's chief engineer.
Revised: The Coast Guard reported yesterday that a cargo ship laden with cement sank overnight in the Philippines, killing the vessel's chief engineer.
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Original:  A passing shp rescued the 19 others, while a coast guard rescue boat itself required rescue in strong waves in the region after getting into difficulties before losing contact.
Revised:  A passing ship rescued the 19 others, while a coast guard rescue boat itself required rescue in strong waves in the region after getting into difficulties before losing contact.
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Original:  Actress Majel Barrett-Roddenberry, who was the wife of Star Trek creator Gene Roddenberry  has died of leukemia at the age of 76.
Revised:  Actress Majel Barrett-Roddenberry, who was the wife of Star Trek creator Gene Roddenberry , has died of leukemia at the age of 76.
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Original: Majels husband Gene died in 1991 of heart failure.
Revised: Majel's husband Gene died in 1991 of heart failure.
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Original:  After his death  Majel took over the Star Trek franchise and put several of Gene's unfinished projects into production which included two television shows
Revised:  After his death , Majel took over the Star Trek franchise and put several of Gene's unfinished projects into production which included two television shows
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Original:  Majel also played Christine Chapel|Nurse Chapel%DIFDELCMD < \\ %%%  in the original Star Trek series starring William Shatner and later played Lwaxana Troi in Star Trek: The Next Generation.
Revised:  Majel also played %DIFDELCMD < \\ %%% in the original Star Trek series starring William Shatner and later played Lwaxana Troi in Star Trek: The Next Generation.
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Original:  it published that: a)  like 1995, 1/4 of lawyers said many/very many judges are corrupt.
Revised:  it published that: a) " like 1995, 1/4 of lawyers said many/very many judges are corrupt.
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Original:  judges, however, said, just 7\% call many/very many judges as corrupt[Tables 10-11] ;b) " Judges see some corruption;
Revised:  judges, however, said, just 7\% call many/very many judges as corrupt[Tables 10-11] ;b) Judges see some corruption;
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Original:  proportions who said - many/very many corrupt judges or justices: 17\% in reference to RTC judges, 14\% to MTC judges, 12\% to Court of Appeals justices, 4\% i to Shari'a Court judges, 4\% to Sandiganbayan justices and 2\% in reference to Supreme Court justices [Table 15 
Revised:  proportions who said - many/very many corrupt judges or justices: 17\% in reference to RTC judges, 14\% to MTC judges, 12\% to Court of Appeals justices, 4\% i to Shari'a Court judges, 4\% to Sandiganbayan justices and 2\% in reference to Supreme Court justices [Table 15 .
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Original:  Both firms now face restructuring, which Polaroid is confident won't affect daily operations - in fact, the company is "planning for new product launches in 2009," and claims to have "entered bankruptcy with ample cash reserves sufficient to finance the company's reorganization under Chapter 11.  
Revised:  Both firms now face restructuring, which Polaroid is confident won't affect daily operations - in fact, the company is "planning for new product launches in 2009," and claims to have "entered bankruptcy with ample cash reserves sufficient to finance the company's reorganization under Chapter 11. " 
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Original: 200px Camera company Polaroid have filed for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection in the United States.
Revised: 200px Camera company Polaroid has filed for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection in the United States.
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Original:  Owned since 2005 by Petters Group Worldwide, Polaroid sais that the group's founder Tom Petters is "under investigation for alleged acts of fraud that have compromised the financial condition of Polaroid."
Revised:  Owned since 2005 by Petters Group Worldwide, Polaroid says that the group's founder Tom Petters is "under investigation for alleged acts of fraud that have compromised the financial condition of Polaroid."
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Original:  Polaroid has further said that employees will be paid without interuption , and that while members of Petters Group were under investigation for fraud, Polaroid's management were not.
Revised:  Polaroid has further said that employees will be paid without interruption , and that while members of Petters Group were under investigation for fraud, Polaroid's management were not.
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Original: Armein Kirland shoots for two points|Armein Kirkland shoots for two points In basketball, the Singapore Slingers beat Darwin All Stars 91 - 65 in a physical game played at the Singapore Indoor Stadium.
Revised: Armein Kirland shoots for two points|Armein Kirkland shoots for two points In basketball, the Singapore Slingers defeated Darwin All Stars 91 - 65 in a physical game played at the Singapore Indoor Stadium.
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Original:  This was the eighth game of the ten game Challenger series featuring South Asian teams.
Revised:  This was the eighth game of the ten-game Challenger series featuring South Asian teams.
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Original:  The next round of the Singapore Challenger Series will be played on 4th January with the Slingers meeting Philippines team RP Harbour Centre.
Revised:  The next round of the Singapore Challenger Series will be played on January 4, 2009 with the Slingers meeting Philippines team RP Harbour Centre.
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Original:  Basketball is growing in presence within Singapore and there are call for Singapore to join an Asian League after bowing out of the Australian NBL competition in 2008
Revised:  Basketball is growing in presence within Singapore and there are call for Singapore to join an Asian League after bowing out of the Australian NBL competition in 2008.
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Original: Armein Kirland shoots for two points|Armein Kirkland shoots for two points In basketball, the Singapore Slingers defeated Darwin All Stars 91 - 65 in a physical game played at the Singapore Indoor Stadium.
Revised: Armein Kirland shoots for two points|Armein Kirkland shoots for two points In basketball, the Singapore Slingers defeated Darwin All-Stars 91 - 65 in a physical game played at the Singapore Indoor Stadium.
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Original: Armein Kirland shoots for two points|Armein Kirkland shoots for two points In basketball, the Singapore Slingers defeated Darwin All Stars 91 - 65 in a physical game played at the Singapore Indoor Stadium.
Revised: Armein Kirland shoots for two points|Armein Kirkland shoots for two points In basketball, the Singapore Slingers defeated Darwin All Stars 91 – 65 in a physical game played at the Singapore Indoor Stadium.
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Original:  The win takes the Slingers to a 7-1 win/loss ratio with two games left in the series.
Revised:  The win takes the Slingers to a 7–1 win/loss ratio with two games left in the series.
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Original:  Brad Bridgewater (25) and Jason Aucoin (16) were the high scorers for the Darwin All Stars
Revised:  Brad Bridgewater (25) and Jason Aucoin (16) were the high scorers for the Darwin All-Stars
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Original: Played in front of a small crowd of less then 1 , 000, the Slingers held the lead throughout the game and continued to extend their lead in each quarter.
Revised: Played in front of a small crowd of less then 1 000, the Slingers held the lead throughout the game and continued to extend their lead in each quarter.
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Original:  In the final quarter the Slingers outscored Darwin by 31–9 to win comfortably.
Revised:  In the final quarter the Slingers outscored Darwin by 31–9 winning comfortably.
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Original:  Basketball is growing in presence within Singapore and there are call for Singapore to join an Asian League after bowing out of the Australian NBL competition in 2008.
Revised:  Basketball is growing in presence within Singapore and there are calls for Singapore to join an Asian League after bowing out of the Australian NBL competition in 2008.
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Original: thumg|The Lockerbie memorial On December 21, 1988 - twenty years ago to the day - a transatlantic airliner broke up in midair and came down onto the Scottish town of Lockerbie.
Revised: thumg|The Lockerbie memorial On this day twenty years ago to the day - a transatlantic airliner broke up in midair and came down onto the Scottish town of Lockerbie.
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Original: thumg|The Lockerbie memorial On December 21, 1988 - twenty years ago to the day - a transatlantic airliner broke up in midair and came down onto the Scottish town of Lockerbie.
Revised: thumg|The Lockerbie memorial On December 21, 1988 - twenty years ago , a transatlantic airliner broke up in midair and came down onto the Scottish town of Lockerbie.
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Original: We asked her if there was any differences between her version of events, and about her thoughts on potential issues with the investigation.
Revised: We asked her if there were any differences between her version of events, and about her thoughts on potential issues with the investigation.
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Original:  One of the aims stated by the website of her victims' group is to maintian the memory of her loved ones;
Revised:  One of the aims stated by the website of her victims' group is to maintain the memory of her loved ones;
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Original:  Wikinews wrote to Mr Megrahi in prison , but he did not respond.
Revised:  Wikinews wrote to Mr Megrahi in prison but he did not respond.
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Original:  The only part that bothered me was the it was connected to the lifting of sanctions and removal from the State Sponsors Terrorism List.
Revised:  The only part that bothered me was that it was connected to the lifting of sanctions and removal from the State Sponsors Terrorism List.
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Original:  She says that the last twenty years have been hard, however: "While I miss my brother everyday , I live a healthy and productive life in his honor.
Revised:  She says that the last twenty years have been hard, however: "While I miss my brother every day , I live a healthy and productive life in his honor.
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Original: thumg| The Lockerbie memorial On this day twenty years ago, a transatlantic airliner broke up in midair and came down onto the Scottish town of Lockerbie.
Revised:  The Lockerbie memorial On this day twenty years ago, a transatlantic airliner broke up in midair and came down onto the Scottish town of Lockerbie.
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Original: Megrahi has not been in touch with Meipz , or with any of the other victims, she tells us.
Revised: Megrahi has not been in touch with Weipz , or with any of the other victims, she tells us.
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Original:  These statements have been backed up by news from the government that it has retained the ability to re-assert control over the site should it feel the need, due to a "Special Share 
Revised:  These statements have been backed up by news from the government that it has retained the ability to re-assert control over the site should it feel the need, due to a "Special Share "
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Original:  The tory defence spokesperson, Gerald Howarth, commented that the firm was "critical" and said "What I'm absolutely determined is that the United Kingdom should have total control of its independent nuclear capability".
Revised:  The Tory defence spokesperson, Gerald Howarth, commented that the firm was "critical" and said "What I'm absolutely determined is that the United Kingdom should have total control of its independent nuclear capability".
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Original: The details of the deal have no been published, though opposition Liberal Democrat Treasury spokesman Vince Cable suggested the deal was "probably in the millions rather than the billions", echoing fears that the firm may have been undervalued in its sale.
Revised: The details of the deal have not been published, though opposition Liberal Democrat Treasury spokesman Vince Cable suggested the deal was "probably in the millions rather than the billions", echoing fears that the firm may have been undervalued in its sale.
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Original: A Trident D5 missile launched from underwater by an American submarine The British government has decided to sell off its stake in the British nuclear weapon manufacturer, Atomic Weapons Establishment (AWE).
Revised: A Trident D5 missile launched from underwater by an American submarineThe British government has decided to sell off its stake in the British nuclear weapon manufacturer, Atomic Weapons Establishment (AWE).
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Original:  The declaration, backed by France and the Netherlands, has been signed by sixty-six countries including Mexico, Israel, Australia and Japan.
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Original:  The  declaration was made in conjunction with the anniversary of the 1948 Universal Declaration of Human Rights, which was made sixty years ago.
Revised:  The historic declaration was made in conjunction with the anniversary of the 1948 Universal Declaration of Human Rights, which was made sixty years ago.
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Original:  High Commissioner for Human Rights Navi Pillay discussed concerns over the countries who had not signed the document, comparing anti-gay laws to Apartheid laws and  that stigma was to blame for unpunished violence and discrimination.
Revised:  High Commissioner for Human Rights Navi Pillay discussed concerns over the countries who had not signed the document, comparing anti-gay laws to Apartheid laws and saying that stigma was to blame for unpunished violence and discrimination.
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Original:  Several Arab and African countries in opposition to the declaration in support of gay rights issued a joint statement condemning the attempt at "the social normalization and possibly the legalization of deplorable acts".
Revised:  Several Arab and African countries , who issued a joint statement condemning the attempt at "the social normalization and possibly the legalization of deplorable acts".
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Original:  In more than eighty countries, homosexuality is a criminal offense--in several countries, being gay could be a death sentence.
Revised:  In more than eighty countries, homosexuality is a criminal offense--and in in seven, homosexuality is a death sentence.
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Original: The United States--along with Russia, China, and many Arab countries--has stirred international tensions after refusing to sign a UN declaration which condemns anti-gay laws and demands international decriminalization of homosexuality.
Revised: The United States--along with Russia, China, and many Arab countries--have stirred international tensions after refusing to sign a UN declaration which condemns anti-gay laws and demands international decriminalization of homosexuality.
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Original: The United States--along with Russia, China, and many Arab countries--has stirred international tensions after refusing to sign a UN declaration which condemns anti-gay laws and demands international decriminalization of homosexuality.
Revised: The United States--along with Russia, China, and many Arab countries--has stirred international tensions after refusing to sign a United Nations declaration which condemns anti-gay laws and demands international decriminalization of homosexuality.
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Original:  The United States' refusal to sign the nonbinding declaration was prompted by its own legal questions.
Revised:  The refusal of the U.S. to sign the nonbinding declaration was prompted by its own legal questions.
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Original:  US spokeswoman Carolyn Vadino to the UN  said that the refusal to sign the declaration does not mean the US doesn't oppose human rights violations related to sexual orientation.
Revised:  Carolyn Vadino, a U.S. spokeswoman to the UN said that the refusal to sign the declaration does not mean the US doesn't oppose human rights violations related to sexual orientation.
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Original:  US spokeswoman Carolyn Vadino to the UN  said that the refusal to sign the declaration does not mean the US doesn't oppose human rights violations related to sexual orientation.
Revised:  US spokeswoman Carolyn Vadino to the UN , said that the refusal to sign the declaration does not mean the US doesn't oppose human rights violations related to sexual orientation.
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Original:  Gay rights activists in the US and around the world, however, expressed anger at the United States' decision, with one international group calling the stance "appalling".
Revised:  Gay rights activists in the U.S. and around the world, however, expressed anger at the United States' decision, with one international group calling the stance "appalling".
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Original:  Former chief US spokesman to the UN Richard Grenell said the United States' reasons for not signing the declaration were "ridiculous", adding that "the U.S. lack of support on this issue only dims our once bright beacon of hope and freedom for those who are persecuted and oppressed."
Revised:  Former chief U.S. spokesman to the UN Richard Grenell said the United States' reasons for not signing the declaration were "ridiculous", adding that "the U.S. lack of support on this issue only dims our once bright beacon of hope and freedom for those who are persecuted and oppressed."
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Original: Carolyn Vadino, a U.S. spokeswoman to the UN, said that the refusal to sign the declaration does not mean the US doesn't oppose human rights violations related to sexual orientation  .
Revised: Carolyn Vadino, a U.S. spokeswoman to the UN, said that the refusal to sign the declaration does not mean the US believes human rights violations related to sexual orientation .
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Original:  In many of these countries, homosexuality is a criminal offense--and in in seven, homosexuality is a death sentence.
Revised:  In many of these countries, homosexuality is a criminal offense--and in in seven, homosexuality carries a death sentence.
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Original: The Vatican has rejected the declaration as well, saying it appreciates the efforts made to end the criminal status of gays in many countries but that the declaration "gives rise to uncertainty in the law and challenges existing human  norms".
Revised: The Vatican has rejected the declaration as well, saying it appreciates the efforts made to end the criminal status of gays in many countries but that the declaration "gives rise to uncertainty in the law and challenges existing human rights norms".
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Original:  Debris  on the runway remained , with the landing gear and left engine of the craft torn off.
Revised:  Debris remained on the runway remained , with the landing gear and left engine of the craft torn off.
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Original:  Debris  on the runway remained , with the landing gear and left engine of the craft torn off.
Revised:  Debris on the runway , with the landing gear and left engine of the craft torn off.
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Original:  The aeroplane burst into flames, and the 112 people onboard were forced to evacuate the aircraft by the use of slides.
Revised:  The airplane burst into flames, and the 112 people onboard were forced to evacuate the aircraft by the use of slides.
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Original:  The aeroplane burst into flames, and the 112 people onboard were forced to evacuate the aircraft by the use of slides.
Revised:  The aeroplane burst into flames, and the 112 people on board were forced to evacuate the aircraft by the use of slides.
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Original:  Mike Wilson, a passenger onboard the aeroplane , described the accident and the chaos that followed: "By the time the plane stopped we were burning pretty well and I think I could feel the heat even through the bulkhead and window.
Revised:  Mike Wilson, a passenger on board the airplane , described the accident and the chaos that followed: "By the time the plane stopped we were burning pretty well and I think I could feel the heat even through the bulkhead and window.
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Original:  Kim Day, the Denver International Airport manager of aviation, reported that the aeroplane went off course about 2 000 feet off the end of the runway, and did not seem to be airborne.
Revised:  Kim Day, the Denver International Airport manager of aviation, reported that the airplane went off course about 2 000 feet off the end of the runway, and did not seem to be airborne.
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Original: The cause of the accident was not immediately known .
Revised: The cause of the accident has not been confirmed, but preliminary reports indicate that a braking malfunction may be to blame .
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Original: A Continental 737A Boeing 737 passenger jet owned and operated by Continental Airlines taking off from Denver, Colorado, in the United States ran off the end of the runway and into a ravine at 6:20 PM local time on Saturday , according to officials .
Revised: A Continental 737A Boeing 737 passenger jet owned and operated by Continental Airlines taking off from Denver, Colorado, in the United States ran off the end of the runway and into a ravine at 6:20 PM local time on Saturday .
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Original: The combined efforts of agents from the Afghan Commandos and Coalition forces has led to the discovery and destruction of two-and-a-half tonnes of marijuana in a local school in southern Afghan province of Kandahar on Friday.
Revised: The combined efforts of agents from the Afghan Commandos and Coalition forces has led to the discovery and destruction of two-and-a-half tonnes of marijuana in an abandoned school in southern Afghan province of Kandahar on Friday.
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Original: The combined efforts of agents from the Afghan Commandos and Coalition forces has led to the discovery and destruction of two-and-a-half tonnes of marijuana in an abandoned school in southern Afghan province of Kandahar on Friday.
Revised: The combined efforts by agents from the Afghan Commandos and Coalition forces has led to the discovery and destruction of two-and-a-half tonnes of marijuana in an abandoned school in southern Afghan province of Kandahar on Friday.
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Original: The combined efforts of agents from the Afghan Commandos and Coalition forces has led to the discovery and destruction of two-and-a-half tonnes of marijuana in an abandoned school in southern Afghan province of Kandahar on Friday.
Revised: The combined efforts of agents from the Afghan Commandos and Coalition forces have led to the discovery and destruction of two-and-a-half tonnes of marijuana in an abandoned school in southern Afghan province of Kandahar on Friday.
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