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Original: Book Lovers Day (aka National Book Lovers Day in the US) is celebrated on August 9 every URL This is an unofficial holiday observed to encourage bibliophiles celebrate reading and literature.
Revised: Book Lovers Day (aka National Book Lovers Day in the US) is celebrated on August 9 every year. This is an unofficial holiday observed to encourage bibliophiles celebrate reading and literature.
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Original:  Book Lovers Day is widely recognised on global scale yet its origin and creator remains unknown till URL
Revised:  Book Lovers Day is widely recognised on global scale yet its origin and creator remains unknown till date.
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Original: Book Lovers Day (aka National Book Lovers Day in the US) is celebrated on August 9 every year.
Revised: Book Lovers Day is celebrated on August 9 every year.
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Original:  born 15 May 1993 in Ingushetia) is a Russian Greco-Roman wrestler of Ingush descent who wrestles in the 87kg weight category.
Revised:  born 15 May 1993 in Ingushetia) is a Russian Greco-Roman wrestler of Ingush descent who wrestles in the 87 kg weight category.
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Original:  Ozdoev began wrestling because he described the sport as the most courageous, the most beautiful and the most unexpectedly impressive sport .
Revised:  Ozdoev began wrestling for its courage, beauty and unexpected impressiveness .
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Original:  He decided to start training in greco-roman wrestling because his elder brother Khamzat , and his neighbors were also engaged in the sport.
Revised:  He decided to start training in Greco-Roman wrestling as his elder brother Khamzat , and his neighbors were also engaged in the sport.
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Original:  He decided to start training in greco-roman wrestling because his elder brother Khamzat , and his neighbors were also engaged in the sport.
Revised:  He decided to start training in greco-roman wrestling because his elder brother Khamzat and his neighbors were also engaged in the sport.
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Original:  After several years, Ozdoev decided to move to Rostov-on-Don to continue with education and to train wrestling where he became a successful wrestler at cadet and junior level.
Revised:  After several years, Ozdoev decided to move to Rostov-on-Don to continue with education and to train wrestling , becoming there a successful wrestler at cadet and junior level.
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Original:  Ozdoev faced Matuzevičius of Lithuania in  Round of 32, and won by 11-2 technical fall, then faced former two-time European Championships bronze medalist Artur Shahinyan of Armenia, Ozdoev beat Shahinyan by 9-1, resulting in another technical fall.
Revised:  Ozdoev faced Matuzevičius of Lithuania in the Round of 32, and won by 11-2 technical fall, then faced former two-time European Championships bronze medalist Artur Shahinyan of Armenia, Ozdoev beat Shahinyan by 9-1, resulting in another technical fall.
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Original:  Ozdoev next faced World silver medalist Denis Kudla and won by fall.
Revised:  Ozdoev then faced World silver medalist Denis Kudla and won by fall.
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Original:  In the semi-finals, Ozdoev beat Islam Abbasov by  4-3 score.
Revised:  In the semi-finals, Ozdoev beat Islam Abbasov by a 4-3 score.
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Original:  In the final match, Ozdoev faced Georgian wrestler, Robert Kobliashvili, but lost by the score of 3-2, ultimately winning the silver medal.
Revised:  In the final match, Ozdoev faced Georgian wrestler, Robert Kobliashvili, but lost by a score of 3-2, ultimately winning the silver medal.
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Original:  2018 Russian National Greco-Roman Wrestling Championships Ozdoev won gold at the 2018 Russian National Championships ;
Revised:  Ozdoev won gold at the 2018 Russian National Championships ;
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Original:  2018 Russian National Greco-Roman Wrestling Championships Ozdoev won gold at the 2018 Russian National Championships ;
Revised:  2018 Russian National Greco-Roman Wrestling Championships Ozdoev won gold at the 2018 Russian National Championships ,
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Original:  Ozdoev firstly defeated Aleksey Mishin, an Olympic champion from the 2004 Summer Olympics, then defeated 2012 Olympic champion, Alan Khugayev.
Revised:  Ozdoev first defeated Aleksey Mishin, an Olympic champion from the 2004 Summer Olympics, then defeated 2012 Olympic champion, Alan Khugayev.
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Original:  In the final match, Ozdoev defeated reigning 2016 Olympic champion Davit Chakvetadze by 10-0 tech fall, thus making Ozdoev a two-time Russian national champion and securing Ozdoev's place to wrestle at the 2018 World Wrestling Championships held in Budapest, Hungary.
Revised:  In the final match, Ozdoev defeated reigning 2016 Olympic champion Davit Chakvetadze by 10-0 technical fall, thus making Ozdoev a two-time Russian national champion and securing Ozdoev's place to wrestle at the 2018 World Wrestling Championships held in Budapest, Hungary.
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Original:  Ozdoev faced Matuzevičius of Lithuania in the Round of 32, and won by 11-2 technical fall, then faced former two-time European Championships bronze medalist Artur Shahinyan of Armenia, Ozdoev beat Shahinyan by 9-1 , resulting in another technical fall.
Revised:  Ozdoev faced Matuzevičius of Lithuania in the Round of 32, and won by 11-2 technical fall, then faced former two-time European Championships bronze medalist Artur Shahinyan of Armenia, Ozdoev beat Shahinyan by 9–1 , resulting in another technical fall.
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Original:  In the semi-finals, Ozdoev beat Islam Abbasov by a 4-3 score.
Revised:  In the semi-finals, Ozdoev beat Islam Abbasov by a 4–3 score.
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Original:  In the final match, Ozdoev faced Georgian wrestler, Robert Kobliashvili, but lost by a score of 3-2 , ultimately winning the silver medal.
Revised:  In the final match, Ozdoev faced Georgian wrestler, Robert Kobliashvili, but lost by a score of 3–2 , ultimately winning the silver medal.
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Original:  His first play Madhav Vilas (1899) was produced by Amdavad Gujarat Natak Company.
Revised:  His first play Madhav Vilas (1899) was produced by Amdavad Gujarati Natak Company.
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Original:  Stage His plays are as follows:
Revised:  Works His plays are as follows:
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Original: Natak Samaj26 October 1905Sati SitaShantaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1908Sati DraupadiNakulChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1910Jalim TuliyaTuliyaManishankar Ratanji Bhatt 'Kant'Deshi Natak Samaj6 June 1912SanyasiDheersinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDevsharmaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhVirsinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaHanumanChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Sam
Revised: Natak Samaj26 October 1905Sati SitaShantaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1908Sati DraupadiDeshi Natak Samaj1910Jalim TuliyaTuliyaManishankar Ratanji Bhatt 'Kant'Deshi Natak Samaj6 June 1912SanyasiDheersinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDevsharmaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhVirsinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaHanumanChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Sam
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Original: Natak Samaj26 October 1905Sati SitaShantaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1908Sati DraupadiNakulChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1910Jalim TuliyaTuliyaManishankar Ratanji Bhatt 'Kant'Deshi Natak Samaj6 June 1912SanyasiDheersinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDevsharmaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhVirsinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaHanumanChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Sam
Revised: Natak Samaj26 October 1905Sati SitaShantaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1908Sati DraupadiNakulChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1910Jalim TuliyaTuliyaManishankar Ratanji Bhatt 'Kant'Deshi Natak Samaj6 June 1912SanyasiDheersinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhVirsinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaHanumanChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Sam
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Original: Natak Samaj26 October 1905Sati SitaShantaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1908Sati DraupadiNakulChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1910Jalim TuliyaTuliyaManishankar Ratanji Bhatt 'Kant'Deshi Natak Samaj6 June 1912SanyasiDheersinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDevsharmaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhVirsinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaHanumanChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Sam
Revised: Natak Samaj26 October 1905Sati SitaShantaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1908Sati DraupadiNakulChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj1910Jalim TuliyaTuliyaManishankar Ratanji Bhatt 'Kant'Deshi Natak Samaj6 June 1912SanyasiDheersinhChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDevsharmaChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaHanumanChhotalal Rukhdev SharmaDeshi Natak Sam
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Original:  He wanted to start his own theatre company so he had consulted poet Fulchandbhai Shah to write Rajhans based on Dashkumaracharitra but he died soon in 1926.
Revised:  He wanted to start his own theatre company so he had consulted poet Fulchandbhai Shah to write Rajhans based on Dashakumaracharitra but he died soon in 1926.
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Original: Natak SamajBased on Saraswatichandra by Govardhanram Tripathi6 July 1912SanyasiDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaDeshi Natak Samaj1915Sati DamayantiDeshi Natak Samaj1916AshokDeshi Natak Samaj1917Siddha SatyendraKachchh Nitidarshak Natak SamajBased on Gulabsinh by Manilal Nabhubhai Dwivedi1918AhalyabaiKachchh Nitidarshak Natak Samaj1918Rukmani SwayamvarKachchh Nitidarshak Natak Sam  
Revised: Natak SamajBased on Saraswatichandra by Govardhanram Tripathi6 July 1912SanyasiDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaDeshi Natak Samaj1915Sati DamayantiDeshi Natak Samaj1916AshokDeshi Natak Samaj1917Siddha SatyendraKachchh Nitidarshak Natak SamajBased on Gulabsinh by Manilal Nabhubhai Dwivedi1918AhalyabaiKachchh Nitidarshak Natak Samaj1918Rukmani SwayamvarKachchh Nitidarshak Natak Samaj See also List of Gujarati-language writers 
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Original: Natak SamajBased on Saraswatichandra by Govardhanram Tripathi6 July 1912SanyasiDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaDeshi Natak Samaj1915Sati DamayantiDeshi Natak Samaj1916AshokDeshi Natak Samaj1917Siddha SatyendraKachchh Nitidarshak Natak SamajBased on Gulabsinh by Manilal Nabhubhai Dwivedi1918AhalyabaiKachchh Nitidarshak Natak Samaj1918Rukmani SwayamvarKachchh Nitidarshak Natak Sam  
Revised: Natak SamajBased on Saraswatichandra by Govardhanram Tripathi6 July 1912SanyasiDeshi Natak Samaj12 December 1912Kulin NayikaDeshi Natak Samaj12 April 1913AjitsinhDeshi Natak Samaj1914Sati SulochnaDeshi Natak Samaj1915Sati DamayantiDeshi Natak Samaj1916AshokDeshi Natak Samaj1917Siddha SatyendraKachchh Nitidarshak Natak SamajBased on Gulabsinh by Manilal Nabhubhai Dwivedi1918AhalyabaiKachchh Nitidarshak Natak Samaj1918Rukmani SwayamvarKachchh Nitidarshak Natak Sam References 
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Original:  He wrote more than fifty plays on social, mythological and historical subjects including commercially or critically successful plays like Rajbeej (1891), Ajabkumari (1899, 1912), Saubhagyasundari (1901), Nandbatrisi (1906) and Krishnacharitra (1906).
Revised:  He wrote more than fifty plays on social, mythological and historical subjects including commercially or critically successful plays like Rajbeej (1891), Ajabkumari (1899, 1912), Saubhagya Sundari (1901), Nandbatrisi (1906) and Krishnacharitra (1906).
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Original:  Works [[File:Bapulal Nayak ane Jaishankar Sundari in 1901.jpg|Bapulal Nayak and Jaishankar Sundari in Mulani's popular play Saubhagyasundari (1901)]] Bapulal Nayak, Dayashankar Oza and Mohan Marwadi in Nandbatrisi (1906) written by Mulani Jethalal Nayak, Dayashankar Vasanji and Jayshankar (Lakhwadwala) in Vikramcharit (1900) written by Mulani Bapulal Nayak and Mohan Marwadi in Mulani's Vasantprabha, 1922 Mulani was active in old Gujarati theatre.
Revised:  Works [[File:Bapulal Nayak ane Jaishankar Sundari in 1901.jpg|Bapulal Nayak and Jaishankar Sundari in Mulani's popular play Saubhagya Sundari (1901)]] Bapulal Nayak, Dayashankar Oza and Mohan Marwadi in Nandbatrisi (1906) written by Mulani Jethalal Nayak, Dayashankar Vasanji and Jayshankar (Lakhwadwala) in Vikramcharit (1900) written by Mulani Bapulal Nayak and Mohan Marwadi in Mulani's Vasantprabha, 1922 Mulani was active in old Gujarati theatre.
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Original: Sinhasan BatrisiSaubhagyasundari19 
Revised: Sinhasan BatrisiSaubhagya Sundari19 
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Original: Recognition He was felicitated by  Bhavnagar Sahitya Sabha in 1944 and  Gujarat Sahitya Sabha in 1946.
Revised: Recognition He was felicitated by the Bhavnagar Sahitya Sabha in 1944 and Gujarat Sahitya Sabha in 1946.
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Original: Recognition He was felicitated by  Bhavnagar Sahitya Sabha in 1944 and  Gujarat Sahitya Sabha in 1946.
Revised: Recognition He was felicitated by Bhavnagar Sahitya Sabha in 1944 and the Gujarat Sahitya Sabha in 1946.
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Original: Works [[File:Bapulal Nayak ane Jaishankar Sundari in 1901.jpg|Bapulal Nayak and Jaishankar Sundari in Mulani's popular play Saubhagya Sundari (1901)]] Bapulal Nayak, Dayashankar Oza and Mohan Marwadi in Nandbatrisi (1906) written by Mulani Jethalal Nayak, Dayashankar Vasanji and Jayshankar (Lakhwadwala) in Vikramcharit (1900) written by Mulani Bapulal Nayak and Mohan Marwadi in Mulani's Vasantprabha, 1922 Mulani was active in old Gujarati theatre.
Revised: Works [[File:Bapulal Nayak ane Jaishankar Sundari in 1901.jpg|Bapulal Nayak and Jaishankar Sundari in Mulani's popular play Saubhagya Sundari (1901)]] Bapulal Nayak, Dayashankar Oza and Mohan Marwadi in Nandbatrisi (1906) written by Mulani Jethalal Nayak, Dayashankar Vasanji and Jayshankar (Lakhwadwala) in Vikramcharit (1900) written by Mulani Bapulal Nayak and Mohan Marwadi in Mulani's Vasantprabha, 1922 Mulani was one of the prominent playwrights of the old Gujarati theatre.
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Original:  His  plays depict the most noticeable features of old Gujarati theatre, including the technique of setting, music and acting, and the theme of triumph of good over evil was central in his plays.
Revised:  His His plays depict the most noticeable features of old Gujarati theatre, including the technique of setting, music and acting, and the theme of triumph of good over evil was central in his plays.
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Revised:  He drew inspiration from historical or mythological episodes and wove it in the contemporary events. His plays also focused on the conflicts arising from the human relations. +28 staged 
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Original:  Before migrating to their modern location the South Sudanese Dinka people lived in close proximity to Alwa, and the Nubian language had a considerable impact on the Dinka vacabulary.
Revised:  Before migrating to their modern location the South Sudanese Dinka people lived in close proximity to Alwa, a relation confirmed by the considerable impact the Nubian language had a considerable impact on the Dinka vacabulary.
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Original:  Before migrating to their modern location the South Sudanese Dinka people lived in close proximity to Alwa, and the Nubian language had a considerable impact on the Dinka vacabulary.
Revised:  Before migrating to their modern location the South Sudanese Dinka people lived in close proximity to Alwa, and the Nubian language had on the Dinka vacabulary.
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Original:  However, since Greek contacts with the Nubian kingdoms of Northern Sudan have been established going back more than two and a half millenia , it may well be argued that through Southern Sudanese exchanges with Nubia there were at least indirect relations since ancient times.
Revised:  However, since Greek contacts with the Nubian kingdoms of Northern Sudan have been established going back more than two and a half millennia , it may well be argued that through Southern Sudanese exchanges with Nubia there were at least indirect relations since ancient times.
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Original:  Hotels, bakeries, café, grocery shops, small industries, cinema and other commercial places, were mostly owned and run by the Greeks who considered Sudan their own new country and Juba their home.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Notos Lounge Bar Grill, the known Café-Restaurant in Juba today, called , is a prime example of the architecture of the first Greek settlers, coming from a region of Greece (the Greek part of Macedonia in Northern Greece today), producing excellent stone masons.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Grill, the known Café-Restaurant in Juba today, called , is a prime example of the architecture of the first Greek settlers, coming from a region of Greece (the Greek part of Macedonia in Northern Greece today), producing excellent stone masons.
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Original:  Today, there are still about 85 structures which are still in place and reminders of the glorious past of the Greeks in Juba, most notably the Greek Orthodox Church Aghios Stylianos, the new Greek Club, the Casino, houses, office buildings and of course the Cinema which has been converted into a Church.
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Original:  Others went to set up shops in more remote places of the region, like Aweil, Deim Zubeir, Kossinga, Meshra er Req, Raga, Rumbek and Tonj . Some soon went on to settle in the Belgian Congo, French Central Africa and other African lands.
Revised:  Some Greeks went to set up shops in more remote places of the region, like Aweil, Deim Zubeir, Kossinga, Meshra er Req, Raga, Rumbek and Tonj . Some soon went on to settle in the Belgian Congo, French Central Africa and other African lands.
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Original: Turkiya (1821–1885) George Averoff, around 1872 The Abu Ruf quarter on a 1914 map  When the Turkish-Egyptian forces of the Ottoman Khedive Mohamed Ali conquered the Funj kingdom in 1821, the invading army reportedly included Greek mercenaries of Arvanite origin – who helped pave the. way for the subsequent conquest of Southern Sudanese lands.
Revised: Turkiya (1821–1885) The Abu Ruf quarter on a 1914 map When the Turkish-Egyptian forces of the Ottoman Khedive Mohamed Ali conquered the Funj kingdom in 1821, the invading army reportedly included Greek mercenaries of Arvanite origin – who helped pave the. way for the subsequent conquest of Southern Sudanese lands.
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Original:  Panayotis Potagos Other Greeks did not come to Southern Sudan for commercial reasons though.
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Original:  He held British nationality and was particularly close with Governor-General Reginald Wingate: 1906 map of Gondokoro with " Greek trader" " around 1900, the government granted him, against a promise to supply the expeditionary force with necessary provisions, the monopoly (for two or three years?) of the ivory trade in Equatoria" According to Chaldeos, Capato also received such an exceptional license doing ivory trade in Bor.
Revised:  He held British nationality and was particularly close with Governor-General Reginald Wingate: " Greek trader" " around 1900, the government granted him, against a promise to supply the expeditionary force with necessary provisions, the monopoly (for two or three years?) of the ivory trade in Equatoria" According to Chaldeos, Capato also received such an exceptional license doing ivory trade in Bor.
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Original:  He held British nationality and was particularly close with Governor-General Reginald Wingate: 1906 map of Gondokoro with " Greek trader" " around 1900, the government granted him, against a promise to supply the expeditionary force with necessary provisions, the monopoly (for two or three years?) of the ivory trade in Equatoria" According to Chaldeos, Capato also received such an exceptional license doing ivory trade in Bor.
Revised:  He held British nationality and was particularly close with Governor-General Reginald Wingate: 1906 map of Gondokoro with " around 1900, the government granted him, against a promise to supply the expeditionary force with necessary provisions, the monopoly (for two or three years?) of the ivory trade in Equatoria" According to Chaldeos, Capato also received such an exceptional license doing ivory trade in Bor.
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Original:  Imprint of a 1908 postcard When Capato after a string of misfortunes – amongst them a fire that destroyed his storehouse in Gondokoro – had to declare bankruptcy in 1912, many of his agents continued the business on their own.
Revised:  When Capato after a string of misfortunes – amongst them a fire that destroyed his storehouse in Gondokoro – had to declare bankruptcy in 1912, many of his agents continued the business on their own.
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Original:  The colonial government supported this immigration as it preferred giving licences to Greek, Jewish, and Syrian merchants, rather than to Northern Sudanese "Jellaba" traders. thumb In the region of Upper Nile, a few Greeks settled in Malakal, Bor – which was a center of ivory trade – and Taufikia.
Revised:  The colonial government supported this immigration as it preferred giving licences to Greek, Jewish, and Syrian merchants, rather than to Northern Sudanese "Jellaba" traders. In the region of Upper Nile, a few Greeks settled in Malakal, Bor – which was a center of ivory trade – and Taufikia.
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Original:  The prominent Greek-South Sudanese entrepreneur George Ghines claims that " The first settlers came to Pageri (Eastern Equatoria), just a few miles from the border town of Nimule, a busting trading area.
Revised:  The prominent Greek-South Sudanese entrepreneur George Ghines claims that « The first settlers came to Pageri (Eastern Equatoria), just a few miles from the border town of Nimule, a busting trading area.
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Original:  Indeed, from the first 350 people during the establishment of Juba in ca 1925, a large number of Greeks close to 2,700 were in Juba, the capital of the Province of Equatoria and Second Capital of Sudan, the time when Juba had merely 25,000 population.
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Original: URL URL URL URL Sofía Blanco (born 1953) is a Garifuna singer from Guatemala, widely recognized for her talent and efforts to promote the cultural traditions of her people.
Revised:  Sofía Blanco (born 1953) is a Garifuna singer from Guatemala, widely recognized for her talent and efforts to promote the cultural traditions of her people.
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Original:  To promote the album and pay homage to Palacio, who died unexpectedly that same year, she toured with the Garifuna Collective giving performances in Los Angeles, Belize  and then across Europe for two months.
Revised:  To promote the album and pay homage to Palacio, who died unexpectedly that same year, she toured with the Garifuna Collective giving performances in Los Angeles, Belize , and then across Europe for two months.
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