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Original:  The Inspector General of Police, Chandra Fernando has blamed on the The Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam ( LTTE ) by saying "It's the Tigers."
Revised:  The Inspector General of Police, Chandra Fernando has blamed on the The Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam LTTE ) by saying "It's the Tigers."
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Original:  The Inspector General of Police, Chandra Fernando has blamed on the The Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam ( LTTE ) by saying "It's the Tigers."
Revised:  The Inspector General of Police, Chandra Fernando has blamed on the The Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam ( (LTTE ) by saying "It's the Tigers."
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Original:  Many fear this assassination and resulting country wide lock down could jeopardize the island's fragile peace process   .
Revised:  Many fear this assassination and resulting country wide lock down could jeopardize the island's fragile peace process . .
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Original:  Two people have been arrested in connection with  attack but their identities have not been released.
Revised:  Two people have been arrested in connection with the attack but their identities have not been released.
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Original: The Inspector General of Police, Chandra Fernando has blamed The Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE), who have observed a peacefire since 2002, by saying "It's the Tigers."
Revised: The Inspector General of Police, Chandra Fernando has blamed The Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE), who have observed a peacefire since 2002.
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Original: The Inspector General of Police, Chandra Fernando told reporters, "It's the Tigers," blaming The Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE), who have observed a peacefire since 2002.
Revised: The Inspector General of Police, Chandra Fernando told reporters, "It's the Tigers," blaming The Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE), who have observed a ceasefire since 2002.
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Original: frame|Lakshman Kadirgamar, 1996 The Foreign Minister of Sri Lanka, Lakshman Kadirgamar, was fatally shot in the chest and head at his home on August 12.
Revised:  The Foreign Minister of Sri Lanka, Lakshman Kadirgamar, was fatally shot in the chest and head at his home on August 12.
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Original:  Sunni groups have called the move for federalism a deal breaker  
Revised:  Sunni groups have called the move for federalism a deal breaker . 
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Original:  The United States has played a strong role in the committee writing the document , described as the Transitional Administrative Law. U.S. Ambassador Zalmay Khalilzad has acted as a broker between the Kurdish, Sunni Arab and Shiite Arab blocs
Revised:  The United States has played a strong role in the committee writing the document described as the Transitional Administrative Law. U.S. Ambassador Zalmay Khalilzad has acted as a broker between the Kurdish, Sunni Arab and Shiite Arab blocs
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Original: The controversy of the sudden call for federalism casts doubt on the chances for the constitution draft meeting a Monday deadline.
Revised: The controversy of the sudden call for federalism cast a doubt on the chances for the constitution draft meeting a Monday deadline.
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Original: The controversy of the sudden call for federalism cast a doubt on the chances for  the constitution draft meeting a Monday deadline.
Revised: The controversy caused by the sudden Sunni call for federalism cast a doubt on the chances for the constitution draft meeting a Monday deadline.
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Original: The controversy of the sudden call for federalism cast a doubt on the chances for  the constitution draft meeting a Monday deadline.
Revised: The controversy of the sudden call for federalism cast doubt on the chances for the constitution draft meeting a Monday deadline.
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Original: The controversy of the sudden call for federalism cast a doubt on the chances for  the constitution draft meeting a Monday deadline.
Revised: The controversy of the sudden call for federalism cast a doubt on the chances for approval of the constitution draft meeting a Monday deadline.
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Original: The controversy of the sudden call for federalism cast a doubt on the chances for  the constitution draft meeting a Monday deadline.
Revised: The controversy of the sudden call for federalism cast a doubt on the chances for the constitution draft by Monday's deadline.
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Original:  Sunnis fear that federal-autonomy zones will keep them from taking a share of the world's second largest known oil reserves that are concentrated in the Kurdish north and Shiite south.
Revised:  Sunnis fear that federal-autonomy zones will keep them from a share of the world's second largest known oil reserves that are concentrated in the Kurdish north and Shiite south.
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Original:  Sunnis fear that federal-autonomy zones will keep them from taking a share of the world's second largest known oil reserves that are concentrated in the Kurdish north and Shiite south.
Revised:  Sunnis fear that federal-autonomy zones will keep them from taking a share of the world's second largest known oil reserves . Those are concentrated in the Kurdish north and Shiite south.
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Original:  The federal government would recieve a percentage of oil revenues, and the rest would go to each governorate according to its population size." Sunnis have still not agreed to any of the main points of the constitutional draft, but Kurdish National Assembly member Mahmud Othman said that Kurdish and Shia groups could use their majority in the parliamentary to get the charter approved by Iraq's legislature.
Revised:  The federal government would recieve a percentage of oil revenues, and the rest would go to each governorate according to its population size." Sunnis have still not agreed to any of the main points of the constitutional draft, but Kurdish National Assembly member Mahmud Othman said that Kurdish and Shiite groups could use their majority in the parliamentary to get the charter approved by Iraq's legislature.
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Original:  A group of volunteers, in the day of the National Monuments of Chile,  moved to Lolol, a town located in O'Higgins Region.
Revised:  Today, the day of the National Monuments of Chile, moved to Lolol, a town located in O'Higgins Region.
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Original:  A group of volunteers, in the day of the National Monuments of Chile,  moved to Lolol, a town located in O'Higgins Region.
Revised:  A group of volunteers, in the day of the National Monuments of Chile, a group of volunteers moved to Lolol, a town located in O'Higgins Region.
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Original:  They helped to clean up what the earthquake destroyed .
Revised:  They helped to clean up the damage caused by the earthquake .
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Original:  The Falcon 9, second in the Falcon series of rockets, has a first stage that is powered by nine Merlin 1c engines, and a second stage powered by one Merlin vacuum engine.
Revised:  The Falcon 9, second in the Falcon series of rockets, has a first stage that is powered by nine Merlin 1C engines, and a second stage powered by one Merlin vacuum engine.
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Original:  Today's inaugural launch carried the Dragon Spacecraft Qualification Unit (DSQU) . The DSQU is a boilerplate version of the Dragon capsule , which will carry people and cargo to the ISS through NASA's COTS program.
Revised:  Today's inaugural launch carried the Dragon Spacecraft Qualification Unit (DSQU) , a boilerplate version of the Dragon capsule , which will carry people and cargo to the ISS through NASA's COTS program.
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Original:  Today's inaugural launch carried the Dragon Spacecraft Qualification Unit (DSQU) . The DSQU is a boilerplate version of the Dragon capsule , which will carry people and cargo to the ISS through NASA's COTS program.
Revised:  Today's inaugural launch carried the Dragon Spacecraft Qualification Unit (DSQU) . The DSQU is a boilerplate version of the Dragon capsule . The Dragon is intended to cargo — and possibly people — to the International Space Station through NASA's COTS program.
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Original:  The Dragon is intended to  cargo — and possibly people — to the International Space Station through NASA's COTS program.
Revised:  The Dragon is intended to take cargo — and possibly people — to the International Space Station through NASA's COTS program.
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Original:  Space Exploration Technologies, also known as SpaceX, successfully launched their Falcon 9 rocket for the first time at 1845 UTC ( 2:45 pm EDT) from Kennedy Space Center at Cape Canaveral, Florida  .
Revised:  Space Exploration Technologies, also known as SpaceX, successfully launched their Falcon 9 rocket for the first time at 1845 UTC ( 2:45 pm EDT) from Kennedy Space Center at Cape Canaveral, Florida , United States .
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Original:  SpaceX CEO and founder Elon Musk hopes that the Falcon 9 will eventually fill the void in human rated rated commercial rockets, but he also recognizes the inherent risk and danger of rocket launches.
Revised:  SpaceX CEO and founder Elon Musk hopes that the Falcon 9 will eventually fill the void in human rated commercial rockets, but he also recognizes the inherent risk and danger of rocket launches.
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Original:  Today's inaugural launch carried the Dragon Spacecraft Qualification Unit (DSQU), a boilerplate version of the Dragon capsule .
Revised:  Today's inaugural launch carried the Dragon Spacecraft Qualification Unit (DSQU), a boilerplate version of the .
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Original:  The Dragon is intended to take cargo — and possibly people — to the International Space Station through NASA's COTS program.
Revised:  The Dragon is intended to take cargo — and possibly people — to the International Space Station through NASA's program.
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Original:  Under President Obama's new plan, NASA would hand over the mundane task of Low Earth Orbit (LEO) launches to private companies, and instead concentrate on new technology development.
Revised:  Under President Obama's new plan, NASA would hand over the mundane task of (LEO) launches to private companies, and instead concentrate on new technology development.
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Original:  "They sort of focus everything on us and try to create a situation where our first launch of Falcon 9 is somehow a verdict on the president's policy, which is not right," he said  
Revised:  "They sort of focus everything on us and try to create a situation where our first launch of Falcon 9 is somehow a verdict on the president's policy, which is not right," he said . 
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Original:  The PA (Palestinian Authority ) had said on Friday that the Palestinian banner of red, black, green and white should be used to celebrate the withdrawal of Israel from Palestinian territory.
Revised:  Palestinian Authority officials had said on Friday that the Palestinian banner of red, black, green and white should be used to celebrate the withdrawal of Israel from Palestinian territory.
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Original: During overnight raids, Israeli soldiers have arrested 10 people  allegedly members of Islamic Jihad, a Palestinian militant group.
Revised: During overnight raids, Israeli soldiers arrested 10 people allegedly members of Islamic Jihad, a Palestinian militant group.
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Original: During overnight raids, Israeli soldiers have arrested 10 people  allegedly members of Islamic Jihad, a Palestinian militant group.
Revised: During overnight raids, Israeli soldiers have arrested 10 people , allegedly members of Islamic Jihad, a Palestinian militant group.
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Original:  The raids were conducted during two operations near the villages  Jenin and Nablus.
Revised:  The raids were conducted during two operations near the villages of Jenin and Nablus.
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Original:  An M16 rifle was also discovered during the raid near Jenin.
Revised:  An M-16 rifle was also discovered during the raid near Jenin.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Hamas, a group friendly to Islamic Jihad, have made a rare public appearance 2 days before Israel are meant to start pulling out settlers and troops from Palestine.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Hamas, a group friendly to Islamic Jihad, made a rare public appearance 2 days before Israel are meant to start pulling out settlers and troops from Palestine.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Hamas, a group friendly to Islamic Jihad, have made a rare public appearance 2 days before Israel are meant to start pulling out settlers and troops from Palestine.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Hamas, a group friendly to Islamic Jihad, have made a rare public appearance 2 days before Israelis start pulling out settlers and troops from Palestine.
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Original:  Palestinian Authority officials had said on Friday that the Palestinian banner of red, black, green and white should be used to celebrate the withdrawal of Israel from Palestinian territory.
Revised:  Palestinian Authority officials said on Friday that the Palestinian banner of red, black, green and white should be used to celebrate the withdrawal of Israel from Palestinian territory.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Hamas, a group friendly to Islamic Jihad, made a rare public appearance 2 days before Israelis start pulling out settlers and troops from Palestine.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Hamas, a group friendly to Islamic Jihad, made a rare public appearance 2 days before the Israeli pull-out of settlers and troops from Palestine.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Hamas, a group friendly to Islamic Jihad, made a rare public appearance 2 days before Israelis start pulling out settlers and troops from Palestine.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Hamas, a group friendly to Islamic Jihad, made a rare public appearance 2 days before Israelis start pulling out settlers and troops in Palestine.
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Original:   Palestinian Authority officials said on Friday that the Palestinian banner of red, black, green and white should be used to celebrate the withdrawal of Israel from Palestinian territory.
Revised:  Palestinian Authority officials said the Palestinian banner of red, black, green and white should be used to celebrate the withdrawal of Israel from Palestinian territory.
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Original:  The raids were conducted during two operations near the villages of Jenin and Nablus.
Revised:  The raids were conducted during two operations near the towns of Jenin and Nablus.
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Original:  On Friday, Palestinian Authority officials said  the Palestinian banner of red, black, green and white should be used to celebrate the withdrawal of Israel from Palestinian territory.
Revised:  On Friday, Palestinian Authority officials said only the Palestinian banner of red, black, green and white should be used to celebrate the withdrawal of Israel from Palestinian territory.
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Original:  However, Rita Fan, who supports the television conference, said she 'sympathised' Ho for not being able to participate.
Revised:  However, Rita Fan, who supports the television conference, said she "sympathised" with Ho for not being able to participate.
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Original:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
Revised:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, " ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
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Original:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
Revised:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If i] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
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Original:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
Revised:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ]f that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
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Original:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
Revised:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? " Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
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Original:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
Revised:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was "passive" and " one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
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Original:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided ' as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
Revised:  Lee Cheuk-yan scoffed, 'If ] that is the case, does that mean that everyone in the world can participate in the football matches by watching the World Cup? ' Fan said such participation was 'passive' and ' one-sided " as the public was not allowed to ask questions during the conference.
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Original:  Following the by-elections, Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has decided to invite Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to debate which would be aired on televisionon the seventeenth of the next month.
Revised:  Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has decided to invite Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to debate which would be aired on televisionon the seventeenth of the next month.
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Original:  Following the by-elections, Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has decided to invite Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to debate which would be aired on televisionon the seventeenth of the next month.
Revised:  Following the by-elections, Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has invited Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to debate which would be aired on televisionon the seventeenth of the next month.
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Original:  Tsang was  glad that Eu  accepted the invitation  .
Revised:  Tsang was glad that Eu has accepted the invitation .
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Original:  However, Eu said Tsang ought not to evade facing the public's concerns , using this conference as an excuse .
Revised:  However, Eu has said that Tsang should not use this debate as an excuse to avoid facing the public's concerns , using this conference as an excuse .
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Original:  However, Eu said Tsang ought not to evade facing the public's concerns , using this conference as an excuse .
Revised:  However, Eu said Tsang ought not to evade facing the public's concerns .
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Original: File:Audrey Eu Yuet Mee 2010.jpg|150px|Audrey Eu talking in the City Forum]] Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has invited Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to  debate the 2009 reform package on television.
Revised: File:Audrey Eu Yuet Mee 2010.jpg|150px|Audrey Eu talking in the City Forum]] Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has invited Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to a debate the 2009 reform package on television.
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Original: File:Audrey Eu Yuet Mee 2010.jpg|150px|Audrey Eu talking in the City Forum]] Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has invited Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to a debate the 2009 reform package on television .
Revised: File:Audrey Eu Yuet Mee 2010.jpg|150px|Audrey Eu talking in the City Forum]] Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has invited Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to a televison debate on the 2009 reform package on television .
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Original: File:Audrey Eu Yuet Mee 2010.jpg|150px|Audrey Eu talking in the City Forum]] Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has invited Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to a debate the 2009 reform package on television .
Revised: File:Audrey Eu Yuet Mee 2010.jpg|150px|Audrey Eu talking in the City Forum]] Hong Kong chief executive Donald Tsang has invited Audrey Eu, the head of the Civic Party, to a debate the 2009 reform package .
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Original: Tsang is glad that Eu has accepted the invitation, and the debate which will air on the seventeenth of June.
Revised: Tsang is glad that Eu has accepted the invitation, and the debate will air on the seventeenth of June.
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Original: Only Eu and Tsang shall be allowed to paricipate in the conference, which caused a huge uproar in the political circles of Hong Kong.
Revised: Only Eu and Tsang will participate in the conference, which caused a huge uproar in the political circles of Hong Kong.
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Original:  The invitation follows the recent so called Five Constituencies Referendum which called for universal suffrage and the abolition of the functional constituencies.
Revised:  The invitation follows the recent so-called Five Constituencies Referendum which called for universal suffrage and the abolition of the functional constituencies.
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Original: Tsang  is glad that Eu has accepted the invitation, and the debate will air on the seventeenth of June.
Revised: Tsang says he is glad that Eu has accepted the invitation, and the debate will air on the seventeenth of June.
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Original:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Hong Kong category:Kayau (Wikinewsie) Category:Writing Contests/May 2010 See also Hong Kong by-elections star
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Original:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Hong Kong category:Kayau (Wikinewsie) Category:Writing Contests/May 2010 See also Hong Kong by-elections star
Revised:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Hong Kong category:Kayau (Wikinewsie) Category:Writing Contests/May 2010 Related news Hong Kong by-elections star
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Original: Clinton made her remarks at after a meeting in Japan with the country's foreign minister, at the start of a trip through Asia.
Revised: Clinton made her remarks after a meeting in Japan with the country's foreign minister, at the start of a trip through Asia.
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Original:  Burundi's President-elect recently suggested that the FNL could be allowed to join his government.
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