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Original:  Assistant works by creating a partition in your hard drive which will contain the Windows operating system.
Revised:  Assistant works by creating a hard drive partition to contain the Windows operating system.
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Original:  Unlike the current method of reformatting, the software will arrange files so that the new partition will not invoke the erasure of existing files.
Revised:  Unlike the current method of reformatting, the software will arrange files so that the new partition will not erase existing files.
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Original:  After the partition is created, you will need to load a Microsoft Windows install disc.
Revised:  After the partition is created, the user must load a Microsoft Windows install disc.
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Original:  While Macs will support booting competitor operating systems with Boot Camp Assistant, Apple will not offer support for the other operating systems .
Revised:  While Macs will support booting competitors' operating systems with Boot Camp Assistant, Apple will not offer support for the other operating systems .
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Original:  While Macs will support booting competitor operating systems with Boot Camp Assistant, Apple will not offer support for the other operating systems .
Revised:  While Macs will support booting competitor operating systems with Boot Camp Assistant, Apple will not offer support for them .
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Original:  Infinite Loop is reporting that this has led to people accidentally permanently installing Windows on their computers.
Revised:  Infinite Loop reports that this has led to people accidentally permanently installing Windows on their computers.
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Original:  Another concerned party includes Microsoft, who claims that their committment to the Macintosh operating system "has not changed."
Revised:  Another concerned party is Microsoft, who claims that their committment to the Macintosh operating system "has not changed."
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Original:  Another concerned party includes Microsoft, who claims that their committment to the Macintosh operating system "has not changed."
Revised:  Another concerned party includes Microsoft, who claims that their commitment to the Macintosh operating system "has not changed."
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Original:  One perceived beneficiary includes gamers, who will no longer find themselves under the constraint of delayed releases for Macintosh versions of games.
Revised:  One group seen to benefit is gamers, who will no longer find themselves under the constraint of delayed releases for Macintosh versions of games.
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Original:  One perceived beneficiary includes gamers, who will no longer find themselves under the constraint of delayed releases for Macintosh versions of games.
Revised:  One perceived beneficiary includes gamers, who will no longer be left waiting for delayed releases of Macintosh versions of games.
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Original:  Peter Cohen of Macworld describes his experience, noting that he 's been able to play certain games with a moderate level of quality.
Revised:  Peter Cohen of Macworld notes that he hass been able to play certain games with a moderate level of quality.
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Original:  He considers this to be a disadvantage for Mac developers, who are responsible for making software already available for Windows for the Macintosh operating system
Revised:  However, he considers this to be a disadvantage for Mac developers, who are responsible for making software already available for Windows for the Macintosh operating system
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Original:  He considers this to be a disadvantage for Mac developers, who are responsible for making software already available for Windows for the Macintosh operating system
Revised:  He considers this to be a disadvantage for Mac developers, who are responsible for bringing software already available for Windows for the Macintosh operating system
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Original:  He considers this to be a disadvantage for Mac developers, who are responsible for making software already available for Windows for the Macintosh operating system
Revised:  He considers this to be a disadvantage for Mac developers, who are responsible for making software already available for Windows to the Macintosh operating system
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Original:  Peter Cohen of Macworld notes that he hass been able to play certain games with a moderate level of quality.
Revised:  Peter Cohen of Macworld notes that he has been able to play certain games with a moderate level of quality.
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Original: Police had shown photos of the two boys to the mother of Purvis, Angela Virginia, and she confirmed that the boys were those of the two  reported missing in March.
Revised: Police had shown photos of the two boys to the mother of Purvis, Angela Virginia, and she confirmed that the bodies were those of the two reported missing in March.
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Original: Police had shown photos of the two boys to the mother of Purvis, Angela Virginia, and she confirmed that the boys were those of the two  reported missing in March.
Revised: Police had shown photos of the two boys to the mother of Purvis, Angela Virginia, and she confirmed that the boys were those of the two boys reported missing in March.
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Original:  However ; police have not yet confirmed the identities of the two boys . "Honestly I don't think there was any foul play.
Revised:  However , police have not yet confirmed the identities of the two boys . "Honestly I don't think there was any foul play.
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Original:  That makes it kind of nice for the family that they weren't held against their own will," said Dennis Frazier the uncle of Quadrevion.
Revised:  That makes it kind of nice for the family that they weren't held against their own will," said Dennis Frazier , uncle of Quadrevion.
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Original:  The second body was found a short time later by divers for the police department  at about 10:00 p.m..
Revised:  The second body was found a short time later by divers for the police department , at about 10:00 p.m..
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Original:  Autopsy results on the still-unidentified bodies are expected today
Revised:  Autopsy results on the still-unidentified bodies is planned for later today
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Original:  Both boys had all their clothes on when they were found.
Revised:  Both boys were fully clothed when found.
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Original:  According to Hegerty, the pond where the bodies were found was checked several times in the past.
Revised:  According to Hegerty, the pond where the bodies were found had been checked several times in the past.
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Original: Police in Milwaukee, Wisconsin have confirmed that the bodies of two children recovered  from a small pond are indeed those of Purvis Parker, 11, and Quadrevion Henning, 12, who lived in the area .
Revised: Police in Milwaukee, Wisconsin have confirmed that the bodies of two children recovered from a small pond are indeed those of Purvis Parker, 11, and Quadrevion Henning, 12, who lived nearby .
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Original:  Police had shown photos of the two bodies to Parker's mother, Angela Virginia, and she confirmed that the bodies were those of the two boys reported missing in March .
Revised:  Police had shown photos of the two bodies to Parker's mother, Angela Virginia, who said she believed that the bodies were those of the two boys reported missing in March .
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Original:  Police had shown photos of the two bodies to Parker's mother, Angela Virginia, and she confirmed that the bodies were those of the two boys reported missing in March .
Revised:  Police had shown photos of the two bodies to Parker's mother, Angela Virginia, and she confirmed that the bodies were those of the two missing boys .
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Original:  Today's autopsy confirms the boys drowned, and police have said there is no evidence to suggest foul play.
Revised:  Today's autopsy confirms their identity, and lists drowning as the cause of death. Police have said there is no evidence to suggest foul play.
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Original: Further to the recent news that the Iranian administration has successfully enriched Uranium for the first time, leader President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad has struck out against Iran at a conference to discuss the situation in Palestine.
Revised: Further to the recent news that the Iranian administration has successfully enriched Uranium for the first time, leader President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad has struck out against Iran at a conference to discuss Palestine.
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Original:  Iran is well known to be a supporter of Palestine, and has previously offered  money to the Palestinian Authorities to make up for loss of Western donation since Hamas gained power
Revised:  Iran is known to be a supporter of Palestine, and has previously offered money to the Palestinian Authorities to make up for loss of Western donation since Hamas gained power
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Original: Days after the Iranian administration announced their first successful enrichment of uranium, President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad has struck out against Israel at a conference to discuss Palestine.
Revised: Days after the Iranian administration announced their first successful enrichment of uranium, President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad has made threatening comments against the Israeli government at a conference to discuss Palestine.
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Original:  During the three day conference on Friday, Ahmadinejad is reported to have commented on Israel’s reported threat to the Middle East and suggested that Israel was "heading toward annihilation," and that it will soon be liberated.
Revised:  During the three day conference on Friday, Ahmadinejad is reported to have commented on Israel’s reported threat to the Middle East and suggested that the Israeli government was "heading toward annihilation," and that it will soon be liberated.
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Original:  Iran is known to be a supporter of Palestine, and has previously offered an unknown amount of money to the Palestinian Authority to make up for the loss of Western donations since Hamas won the Palestinian legislative elections in 2006
Revised:  Iran is known to be a supporter of Palestine, and has previously offered an unknown amount of money to the Palestinian Authority to make up for the loss of Western donations since Hamas won the 
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Original:  He added that this was one of the most atrocious crimes he had seen as district attorney, and that he intends to seek the death penalty  
Revised:  He added that this was one of the most atrocious crimes he had seen as district attorney, and that he intends to seek the death penalty . 
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Original:  The prosecutor added that authorities believe "that while she was ultimately chosen to be the victim of this horrific crime, that other people had been targeted and considered," including a a woman and a 5-year-old boy.
Revised:  The prosecutor added that authorities believe "that while she was ultimately chosen to be the victim of this horrific crime, that other people had been targeted and considered," including a woman and a 5-year-old boy.
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Original:  He will be buried on Tel Hai Street  in Tel Aviv, Israel.
Revised:  He will be buried in the Tel Hai Street in Tel Aviv, Israel.
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Original:  He was famous for his satirical short stories , being translated into 37 languages.
Revised:  A worldwide bestselling author, his books and short stories were translated into 37 languages.
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Original:  He won many awards over the years, including the Israeli Nordau Prize for Literature (1953), the Israeli Sokolov Prize for outstanding journalistic work (1958), the Israeli Kinor David Prize (1964), and the Israel Prize for Lifetime Achievement (2002).
Revised:  He won many awards over the years, including the Israeli Nordau Prize for Literature (1953), the Israeli Sokolov Prize for Journalism (1958), the Israeli Kinor David Prize (1964), and the Israel Prize for Lifetime Achievement (2002).
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Original:  Israeli Prime Minister, Ariel Sharon, said in an eulogy: "Ephraim Kishon was one of the giants of Israeli culture, who created an entire cultural world for a country in formation;
Revised:  Israeli Prime Minister, Ariel Sharon, said in a eulogy: "Ephraim Kishon was one of the giants of Israeli culture, who created an entire cultural world for a country in formation;
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Original:  References . . de:Ephraim Kishon ist tot  Biography of Ephraim Kishon, on The Israel Prize Unit of the Israeli Ministry of Educatio
Revised:  References . . de:Ephraim Kishon ist tot Biography of Ephraim Kishon, The Israel Prize Unit of the Israeli Ministry of Educatio
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Original: References . . de:Ephraim Kishon ist tot Yariv Mohar "Ephraim Kishon was laid to rest".
Revised: References . . Yariv Mohar "Ephraim Kishon was laid to rest".
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Original: However, Lisa Ince, head of Sydney Professional Dancers, disagreed.
Revised:  Lisa Ince, head of Sydney Professional Dancers, disagreed.
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Original:  "We don't seek to collectively use our influence, along with the influence of other countries like Canada who are major uranium exporters, to try and restrict the proliferation of nuclear weapons" he said "
Revised:  "We don't seek to collectively use our influence, along with the influence of other countries like Canada who are major uranium exporters, to try and restrict the proliferation of nuclear weapons" he said .
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Original:  The debate within the party has come to the forefront following a decision earlier this month to export Uranium to w: China.
Revised:  The debate within the party has come to the forefront following a decision earlier this month to export Uranium to China.
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Original: The Australian Labor Party - the federal opposition party in Australia is said to be divided about it's Uranium mining policy.
Revised: The Australian Labor Party - the federal opposition party in Australia is said to be divided about its Uranium mining policy.
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Original:  At present  Labor opposes the opening of new Uranium mines.
Revised:  At present , Labor opposes the opening of new Uranium mines.
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Original: A finance spokesperson for the Australian federal opposition has said that Australia could use it's power as a large Uranium exporter to discourage the proliferation of nuclear weapons.
Revised: A finance spokesperson for the Australian federal opposition has said that Australia could use its power as a large Uranium exporter to discourage the proliferation of nuclear weapons.
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Original: A finance spokesperson for the Australian federal opposition has said that Australia could use its power as a large Uranium exporter to discourage the proliferation of nuclear weapons.
Revised: A finance spokesperson for the Australian federal opposition has said that Australia could use its power as a large uranium exporter to discourage the proliferation of nuclear weapons.
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Original:  Australia has the largest known reserves of Uranium but is the World 's third largest producer behind Canada and the Commonwealth of Independent States.
Revised:  Australia has the largest known reserves of uranium but is the World 's third largest producer behind Canada and the Commonwealth of Independent States.
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Original:  Australia has the largest known reserves of Uranium but is the World 's third largest producer behind Canada and the Commonwealth of Independent States.
Revised:  Australia has the largest known reserves of Uranium but is the world 's third largest producer behind Canada and the Commonwealth of Independent States.
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Original:  Lindsay Tanner told Channel Ten  "We could play a much stronger role as a uranium exporter as part of a relatively small number of major uranium exporters, in using that influence collectively for good on nuclear weapons proliferation".
Revised:  Lindsay Tanner told Channel Ten that: "We could play a much stronger role as a uranium exporter as part of a relatively small number of major uranium exporters, in using that influence collectively for good on nuclear weapons proliferation".
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Original:  Mr  Tanner said Australia could join forces with other major Uranium exporters to discourage the spread of nuclear weapons.
Revised:  Mr . Tanner said Australia could join forces with other major Uranium exporters to discourage the spread of nuclear weapons.
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Original:  Mr  Tanner said Australia could join forces with other major Uranium exporters to discourage the spread of nuclear weapons.
Revised:  Mr Tanner said Australia could join forces with other major uranium exporters to discourage the spread of nuclear weapons.
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Original:  "We don't seek to collectively use our influence, along with the influence of other countries like Canada who are major uranium exporters, to try and restrict the proliferation of nuclear weapons  " he said.
Revised:  "We don't seek to collectively use our influence, along with the influence of other countries like Canada who are major uranium exporters, to try and restrict the proliferation of nuclear weapons , " he said.
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Original:  The Australian Labor Party - the federal opposition party in Australia is said to be divided about its Uranium mining policy.
Revised:  The Australian Labor Party is said to be divided about its Uranium mining policy.
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Original:  The Australian Labor Party - the federal opposition party in Australia is said to be divided about its Uranium mining policy.
Revised:  The Australian Labor Party - the federal opposition party in Australia is said to be divided about its uranium mining policy.
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Original:  The debate within the party has come to the forefront following a decision earlier this month to export Uranium to China.
Revised:  The debate within the party has come to the forefront following a decision earlier this month to export uranium to China.
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Original:  At present, Labor opposes the opening of new Uranium mines.
Revised:  At present, Labor opposes the opening of new uranium mines.
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Original:  Peter Garrett, another member of the ALP said last week he did not support any changes to the party's Uranium mining policy but refused to rule out doing so in the future.
Revised:  Peter Garrett, another member of the ALP said last week he did not support any changes to the party's uranium mining policy but refused to rule out doing so in the future.
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Original:  Mr  Tanner said that it is "perfectly reasonable" to reconsider the party's policy as "the world has changed".
Revised:  Mr . Tanner said that it is "perfectly reasonable" to reconsider the party's policy as "the world has changed".
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Original:  "So there's a number of things we could be doing, but we aren't doing yet, and I think (that) should be central to the debate about the future of Labor's policy and the future of Australia's approach" said Mr  Tanner.
Revised:  "So there's a number of things we could be doing, but we aren't doing yet, and I think (that) should be central to the debate about the future of Labor's policy and the future of Australia's approach" said Mr . Tanner.
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Original:  The party's resource spokesperson, Martian Ferguson is calling for the policy to be thrown out.
Revised:  The party's resource spokesperson, Martin Ferguson is calling for the policy to be thrown out.
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Original: File Picture of Nuclear Power Station British MPs from the Commons Environmental Audit Committee have warned that Britain could face widespread electrical blackouts if new power generating capacity is not added soon.
Revised: File Picture of Nuclear Power Station British MPs on the Commons Environmental Audit Committee have warned that Britain could face widespread electrical blackouts if new power generating capacity is not added soon.
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Original: File Picture of Nuclear Power Station British MPs from the Commons Environmental Audit Committee have warned that Britain could face widespread electrical blackouts if new power generating capacity is not added soon.
Revised: File Picture of Nuclear Power Station British MPs from the Commons Environmental Audit Committee warn Britain could face widespread electrical blackouts if new power generating capacity is not added soon.
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Original: File Picture of Nuclear Power Station British MPs from the Commons Environmental Audit Committee have warned that Britain could face widespread electrical blackouts if new power generating capacity is not added soon.
Revised: File Picture of Nuclear Power Station British MPs from the Commons Environmental Audit Committee have warned that Britain could face widespread electrical blackouts if new generating capacity is not added soon.
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Original:  Despite nuclear power being the preferred method of generating electricity it is warned that no new nuclear power plants are due to come online until at least 2017.
Revised:  Despite nuclear power being the preferred method of generating electricity it is warned that no new nuclear power plants are expected to come online until at least 2017.
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Original:  It is stated that nearly one quarter of Britain's current generating capacity is due to go offline by 2016 which will create a shortfall.
Revised:  It is stated that nearly one quarter of Britain's current generating capacity is scheduled to go offline by 2016 which will create a shortfall.
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Original:  It is stated that nearly one quarter of Britain's current generating capacity is due to go offline by 2016 which will create a shortfall.
Revised:  It is stated that nearly one quarter of Britain's current generating capacity is due to go offline by 2016 , creating a shortfall.
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Original: Clean and renewable generating methods will be preferred in the Government's energy review, including a return to nuclear power generation, but the committee warned that no new nuclear power plants are expected to come online until at least 2017 with the proposed network not reaching full capacity until as late as 2030.
Revised: Clean and renewable generating methods will be preferred in the Government's energy review, as well as a return to nuclear power generation, but the committee warned that no new nuclear power plants are expected to come online until at least 2017 with the proposed network not reaching full capacity until as late as 2030.
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Original: Clean and renewable generating methods will be preferred in the Government's energy review, as well as a return to nuclear power generation, but the committee warned that no new nuclear power plants are expected to come online until at least 2017 with the proposed network not reaching full capacity until as late as 2030.
Revised: Clean and renewable generating methods will be preferred in the Government's energy review, including a return to nuclear power generation, but the committee warned that no new nuclear power plants are expected to come online until at least 2017 with the proposed network not reaching full capacity until as late as 2030.
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Original: Aruban police have made an arrest in relation to the Natalee Halloway case.
Revised: Aruban police have made an arrest in relation to the Natalee Holloway case.
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Original:  Halloway , 18, was visiting the island from Alabama and has not been seen since May 30, 2005 with Joran van der Sloot and brothers Deepak and Satish Kalpoe.
Revised:  Holloway , 18, was visiting the island from Alabama and has not been seen since May 30, 2005 with Joran van der Sloot and brothers Deepak and Satish Kalpoe.
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