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Original:  His policies, including the nationalization of the iron and petroleum industries, investment in large state-owned industrial projects for the production of aluminium and hydroelectric energy, infrastructure improvements  and the funding of social welfare and scholarship programmes , were extremely ambitious and involved massive government spending, to the tune of almost $53 billion.
Revised:  His policies, including the nationalization of the iron and petroleum industries, investment in large state-owned industrial projects for the production of aluminium and hydroelectric energy, infrastructure improvements and the funding of social welfare and scholarship programs , were extremely ambitious and involved massive government spending, to the tune of almost $53 billion.
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Original:  His measures to protect the environment and foster sustainable development earned  the Earth Care award in 1975, the first time a Latin American leader had received this recognition.
Revised:  His measures to protect the environment and foster sustainable development earned him the Earth Care award in 1975, the first time a Latin American leader had received this recognition.
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Original:  He commissioned a report on government  which was prepared and carried out by Arnoldo Gabaldón.
Revised:  He commissioned a report on government , which was prepared and carried out by Arnoldo Gabaldón.
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Original:  Gabaldón himself was named to a super-ministry  which combined public works and communications.
Revised:  Gabaldón himself was named to a super-ministry , which combined public works and communications.
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Original:  Public Administration in Venezuela, 1978 As it was impossible to hire every Venezuelan, Pérez decreed that all public places should have bathroom attendants and that every elevator the country over should have an operator, although Venezuela had only had one or two hand-operated elevators before the Pérez Jiménez building euphoria.
Revised:  Public Administration in Venezuela, 1978 Since it was impossible to hire every Venezuelan, Pérez decreed that all public places should have bathroom attendants and that every elevator the country over should have an operator, although Venezuela had only had one or two hand-operated elevators before the Pérez Jiménez building euphoria.
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Original:  Contracts were handed out with abandon  and Venezuelans applauded with gusto.
Revised:  Contracts were handed out with abandon , and Venezuelans applauded with gusto.
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Original:  Corruption went up incalculably  and there was even a case in which Venezuela bought a meat-freezing ship named the Sierra Nevada  which was anchored to store part of the immense quantity of imports that were being handled.
Revised:  Corruption went up incalculably , and there was even a case in which Venezuela bought a meat-freezing ship named the Sierra Nevada which was anchored to store part of the immense quantity of imports that were being handled.
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Original:  Corruption went up incalculably  and there was even a case in which Venezuela bought a meat-freezing ship named the Sierra Nevada  which was anchored to store part of the immense quantity of imports that were being handled.
Revised:  Corruption went up incalculably and there was even a case in which Venezuela bought a meat-freezing ship named the Sierra Nevada , which was anchored to store part of the immense quantity of imports that were being handled.
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Original:  Their windows could not be opened  and they were not equipped for the Venezuelan heat.
Revised:  Their windows could not be opened , and they were not equipped for the Venezuelan heat.
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Original:  But consumerism was the whole point to it all.
Revised:  But consumerism was the whole point of it all.
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Original:  The bolivar, Venezuela's currency, was so over-valued that almost anybody in Venezuela with a minimum of initiative could go to Miami and bring a suitcase load of goods which were sold to customers, usually friends or neighbors.
Revised:  The bolivar, Venezuela's currency, was so over-valued that almost anybody in Venezuela with a minimum of initiative could go to Miami and bring a suitcase-load of goods which were sold to customers, usually friends or neighbors.
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Original:  Only in the television market did Pérez show scruples against rampant consumerism: possibly under pressure from retailers with large inventories of black-and-white sets, he refused to allow color TV sets until far into his administration, although one could buy them on the free-port island of Margarita and could see color TV in Caracas, where transmissions of color broadcasts had already started.
Revised:  Only in the television market did Pérez show scruples against rampant consumerism: Possibly under pressure from retailers with large inventories of black-and-white sets, he refused to allow color TV sets until far into his administration, although one could buy them on the free-port island of Margarita and could see color TV in Caracas, where transmissions of color broadcasts had already started.
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Original:  Crime in the streets was another by-product of the Venezuelan oil economy, although this could only partially be blamed on the new riches — obviously, with so much spending going on, thugs had easy marks any where — but mainly on the thousands of guns that had been put into circulation during the leftist insurgency which Pérez battled.
Revised:  Crime in the streets was another by-product of the Venezuelan oil economy, although this could only partially be blamed on the new riches — obviously, with so much spending going on, thugs had easy marks anywhere — but mainly on the thousands of guns that had been put into circulation during the leftist insurgency which Pérez battled.
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Original:  Crime in the streets was another by-product of the Venezuelan oil economy, although this could only partially be blamed on the new riches — obviously, with so much spending going on, thugs had easy marks any where — but mainly on the thousands of guns that had been put into circulation during the leftist insurgency which Pérez battled.
Revised:  Crime in the streets was another by-product of the Venezuelan oil economy, although this could only partially be blamed on the new riches — obviously, with so much spending going on, thugs had easy marks any where — but mainly on the thousands of guns that had been put into circulation during the leftist insurgency that Pérez battled.
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Original:  Yet Pérez's credentials as a nationalist leader were not soiled , in fact for many they were enhanced , because in 1975 he nationalized the iron industry  and in 1976 he jumped further and nationalized the oil industry.
Revised:  Yet Pérez's credentials as a nationalist leader were not soiled . In fact, for many they were enhanced , because in 1975 he nationalized the iron industry and in 1976 he jumped further and nationalized the oil industry.
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Original:  Yet Pérez's credentials as a nationalist leader were not soiled , in fact for many they were enhanced , because in 1975 he nationalized the iron industry  and in 1976 he jumped further and nationalized the oil industry.
Revised:  Yet Pérez's credentials as a nationalist leader were not soiled , in fact for many they were enhanced because in 1975 he nationalized the iron industry and in 1976 he jumped further and nationalized the oil industry.
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Original:  Yet Pérez's credentials as a nationalist leader were not soiled , in fact for many they were enhanced , because in 1975 he nationalized the iron industry  and in 1976 he jumped further and nationalized the oil industry.
Revised:  Yet Pérez's credentials as a nationalist leader were not soiled , in fact for many they were enhanced , because in 1975 he nationalized the iron industry , and in 1976 he jumped further and nationalized the oil industry.
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Original:  As by that time Venezuela was equipped to manage it, not much harm was done by that in itself, but with all the new collaterals that the government could offer, Pérez, after having gone through the "surplus" for investments, started taking out international loans , and not small ones but sizable ones.
Revised:  Since by that time Venezuela was equipped to manage it, not much harm was done by that in itself, but with all the new collaterals that the government could offer, Pérez, after having gone through the "surplus" for investments, started taking out international loans , and not small ones but sizable ones.
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Original:  As by that time Venezuela was equipped to manage it, not much harm was done by that in itself, but with all the new collaterals that the government could offer, Pérez, after having gone through the "surplus" for investments, started taking out international loans , and not small ones but sizable ones.
Revised:  As by that time Venezuela was equipped to manage it, not much harm was done by that in itself, but with all the new collaterals that the government could offer, Pérez, after having gone through the "surplus" for investments, started taking out international loans and not small ones but sizable ones.
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Original:  Permisologia was not meant to deter foreigners  and it was more burdensome on Venezuelan small entrepreneurs than on any other economic sector.
Revised:  Permisologia was not meant to deter foreigners , and it was more burdensome on Venezuelan small entrepreneurs than on any other economic sector.
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Original:  Leftists were in a dazzled quandary , because, on one hand, they disliked Pérez, but, on the other, they couldn’t complain about the state's interference as that was part of their own social and economic agenda.
Revised:  Leftists were in a dazzled quandary because, on one hand, they disliked Pérez, but, on the other, they couldn’t complain about the state's interference as that was part of their own social and economic agenda.
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Original:  Leftists were in a dazzled quandary , because, on one hand, they disliked Pérez, but, on the other, they couldn’t complain about the state's interference as that was part of their own social and economic agenda.
Revised:  Leftists were in a dazzled quandary , because, on one hand, they disliked Pérez, but, on the other, they couldn’t complain about the state's interference because that was part of their own social and economic agenda.
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Original:  One thing that can be credited to Pérez is that he introduced legislation to protect the environment, whereas Caldera had tried to build a road into the vast southern area of Venezuela known as Amazonas  which his government wanted to settle and URL As soils there are barren, all that could have been achieved would have been the destruction of forested areas where only Amerindian tribes and missionaries, both Catholic and Baptist, lived.
Revised:  One thing that can be credited to Pérez is that he introduced legislation to protect the environment, whereas Caldera had tried to build a road into the vast southern area of Venezuela known as Amazonas , which his government wanted to settle and URL As soils there are barren, all that could have been achieved would have been the destruction of forested areas where only Amerindian tribes and missionaries, both Catholic and Baptist, lived.
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Original:  One thing that can be credited to Pérez is that he introduced legislation to protect the environment, whereas Caldera had tried to build a road into the vast southern area of Venezuela known as Amazonas  which his government wanted to settle and URL As soils there are barren, all that could have been achieved would have been the destruction of forested areas where only Amerindian tribes and missionaries, both Catholic and Baptist, lived.
Revised:  One thing that can be credited to Pérez is that he introduced legislation to protect the environment, whereas Caldera had tried to build a road into the vast southern area of Venezuela known as Amazonas which his government wanted to settle and URL Since soils there are barren, all that could have been achieved would have been the destruction of forested areas where only Amerindian tribes and missionaries, both Catholic and Baptist, lived.
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Original:  By the time that Pérez was through with Venezuela, it was palpable that its society was more unequal than it ever had been: the pardos had been done in again, and as to economic diversification, there was essentially none.
Revised:  By the time that Pérez was through with Venezuela, it was palpable that its society was more unequal than it ever had been: The pardos had been done in again, and as to economic diversification, there was essentially none.
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Original: Domestic policy Nationalization of Oil, January 1, 1976 One of the most radical aspects of Pérez's program for government was the notion that petroleum oil was a tool for under-developed nations like Venezuela to attain first world status and usher a fairer, more equitable international order.
Revised: Domestic policy One of the most radical aspects of Pérez's program for government was the notion that petroleum oil was a tool for under-developed nations like Venezuela to attain first world status and usher a fairer, more equitable international order.
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Original: The first presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (from 1974 to 1979) coincided with the oil boom of 1974, which saw Venezuela's economy explode .
Revised: The first presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (from 1974 to 1979) coincided with the oil boom of 1974, which saw Venezuela's economy prosper .
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Original: One thing that can be credited to Pérez is that he introduced legislation to protect the environment, whereas Caldera had tried to build a road into the vast southern area of Venezuela known as Amazonas, which his government wanted to settle and URL Since soils there are barren, all that could have been achieved would have been the destruction of forested areas where only Amerindian tribes and missionaries, both Catholic and Baptist, lived.
Revised: One thing that can be credited to Pérez is that he introduced legislation to protect the environment, whereas Caldera had tried to build a road into the vast southern area of Venezuela known as Amazonas, which his government wanted to settle and exploit. Since soils there are barren, all that could have been achieved would have been the destruction of forested areas where only Amerindian tribes and missionaries, both Catholic and Baptist, lived.
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Original: The second presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (1989–93) saw an economic crisis, a major riot in which hundreds were killed by security forces (Caracazo, 1989),  two coup attempts in 1992, and the 1993 impeachment of "CAP" for corruption .
Revised: The second presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (1989–93) started with an economic crisis, a major riot in which hundreds were killed by security forces (Caracazo, 1989), two coup attempts in 1992, and the 1993 impeachment of "CAP" for corruption .
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Original: The second presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (1989–93) saw an economic crisis, a major riot in which hundreds were killed by security forces (Caracazo, 1989),  two coup attempts in 1992, and the 1993 impeachment of "CAP" for corruption .
Revised: The second presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (1989–93) saw an economic crisis, a major riot in which hundreds were killed by security forces (Caracazo, 1989), two coup attempts in 1992, and his 1993 impeachment of "CAP" for corruption .
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Original: The second presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (1989–93) saw an economic crisis, a major riot in which hundreds were killed by security forces (Caracazo, 1989),  two coup attempts in 1992, and the 1993 impeachment of "CAP" for corruption .
Revised: The second presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (1989–93) saw an economic crisis, a major riot in which hundreds were killed by security forces (Caracazo, 1989), two coup attempts in 1992, and the 1993 impeachment .
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Original:  This cooperation with the IMF came about weeks after his victory in the 1988 presidential election , and a populist, anti-neoliberal campaign during which he described the IMF as "a neutron bomb that killed people , but left buildings standing"
Revised:  This cooperation with the IMF came about weeks after his victory in the 1988 presidential election , and a populist, anti-neoliberal campaign during which he described the IMF as "a neutron bomb that killed people but left buildings standing"
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Original:  The issue had originally been brought to public scrutiny in November 1992 by journalist José Vicente Rangel.
Revised:  The issue had originally been brought to public scrutiny in by journalist José Vicente Rangel.
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Original:  Pérez and his supporters claim the money was used to support the electoral process in Nicaragua  .
Revised:  The money was used to support the electoral process in Nicaragua .
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Original: Presidency Carlos Andrés Pérez based his campaign for the 1988 Venezuelan general election in his legacy of abundance during his first presidential period and initially rejected liberalization policies , stating that the IMF was a "neutron bomb that killed people but left buildings standing" .
Revised: Presidency Carlos Andrés Pérez based his campaign for the 1988 Venezuelan general election in his legacy of abundance during his first presidential period and initially rejected liberalization policies .
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Original:  Maj Gen Abrar Hussain receiving HJ from the C-in-C, Gen Musa Khan.
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Original: Arif, Gen KM. ( 18.4.1992 ).
Revised: Arif, Gen KM. ( 18 April 1992 ).
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Original:  Here, he was directly involved from 1955 to 1958 in the induction of US military equipment for modernization of four infantry and one and a half armoured divisions.
Revised:  Here, he was directly involved from 1955 to 1958 in the induction of US military equipment for modernisation of four infantry and one and a half armoured divisions.
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Original:  On September 11  , the enemy attacked the Chawinda defences held by a weak force which had taken over the responsibility only hours earlier.
Revised:  On 11 , the enemy attacked the Chawinda defences held by a weak force which had taken over the responsibility only hours earlier.
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Original:  Inspiring the division from the front, Abrar went to the critical part of the frontline, relieved the force with an infantry brigade and stabilized the situation before returning to his Headquarters.
Revised:  Inspiring the division from the front, Abrar went to the critical part of the frontline, relieved the force with an infantry brigade and stabilised the situation before returning to his Headquarters.
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Original:  For his inspiring leadership and skillful conduct of operations, he was awarded the Hilal-i-Jurat.
Revised:  For his inspiring leadership and skilful conduct of operations, he was awarded the Hilal-i-Jurat.
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Original:  On 16 April 1975, in retirement, General Abrar suffered a stroke which paralyzed the right side of his body and impeded his speech.
Revised:  On 16 April 1975, in retirement, General Abrar suffered a stroke which paralysed the right side of his body and impeded his speech.
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Original:  His task was far from complete, when India invaded Pakistan on 6 September 1965.
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Original: Asian Games medalists in cricket Category:Cricketers at the 2010 Asian Games Category:Cricketers at the 2014 Asian Games Category:Medalists at the 2010 Asian Games Category:Medalists at the 2014 Asian Games Category:Karachi cricketers Category:Living people Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani women cricketers Category:Pakistan women One Day International cricketers Category:Pakistan women Twenty20 International cricketers Category: Sportspeople from Karac
Revised: Asian Games medalists in cricket Category:Cricketers at the 2010 Asian Games Category:Cricketers at the 2014 Asian Games Category:Medalists at the 2010 Asian Games Category:Medalists at the 2014 Asian Games Category:Karachi cricketers Category:Living people Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani women cricketers Category:Pakistan women One Day International cricketers Category:Pakistan women Twenty20 International cricketers Category: Cricketers from Karac
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Original:  Abidi was vice captain of the Pakistan women cricket team and is vice captain of her club Ztbl from 2008.
Revised:  Abidi was vice captain of the Pakistan women cricket team and is vice captain of her club ZTBL from 2008.
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Original:  Abidi was vice captain of the Pakistan women cricket team and is vice captain of her club ZTBL from 2008.
Revised:  Abidi was vice captain of the Pakistan women cricket team and is vice captain of her club Ztbl from 2008.
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Original: Hilgard Muller, (4 May 1914, Potchefstroom – 10 July URL was a South African politician of the National Party, Mayor of Pretoria in 1953–1955, elected an MP in 1958, appointed Minister of Foreign URL after the resignation of Eric Louw in 1964.
Revised: Hilgard Muller, (4 May 1914, Potchefstroom – 10 July URL was a South African politician of the National Party, Mayor of Pretoria in 1953–1955, elected an MP in 1958, appointed Minister of Foreign Affairs after the resignation of Eric Louw in 1964.
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Original: Hilgard Muller, DMS (4 May 1914 , Potchefstroom – 10 July 1985) was a South African politician of the National Party, Mayor of Pretoria in 1953–1955, elected an MP in 1958, appointed Minister of Foreign Affairs after the resignation of Eric Louw in 1964.
Revised: Hilgard Muller, DMS (4 May 1914 – 10 July 1985) was a South African politician of the National Party, Mayor of Pretoria in 1953–1955, elected an MP in 1958, appointed Minister of Foreign Affairs after the resignation of Eric Louw in 1964.
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Original: Hilgard Muller, DMS (4 May 1914 – 10 July 1985) was a South African politician of the National Party, Mayor of Pretoria in 1953–1955, elected an MP in 1958, appointed Minister of Foreign Affairs after the resignation of Eric Louw in 1964.
Revised: Hilgard Muller, (4 May 1914 – 10 July 1985) was a South African politician of the National Party, Mayor of Pretoria in 1953–1955, elected an MP in 1958, appointed Minister of Foreign Affairs after the resignation of Eric Louw in 1964.
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Original:  The seminars are held in major arena's in larger U.S. cities, and the events are titled "Seize the Day + "city name " . ex. "Seize the Day URL
Revised:  The seminars are held in major arenas in larger U.S. cities, and the events are titled "Seize the Day + "city name " . ex. "Seize the Day URL
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Original:  The seminars are held in major arena's in larger U.S. cities, and the events are titled "Seize the Day + "city name " . ex. "Seize the Day URL
Revised:  The seminars are held in major arena's in larger U.S. cities, and the events are titled "Seize the Day + "city name ." ex. "Seize the Day URL
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Original:  Motivational speakers have included Laura Bush, Bill O' Reily , Terry Bradshaw, Ben Stein, Phil Town and others.
Revised:  Motivational speakers have included Laura Bush, Bill O' Reilly , Terry Bradshaw, Ben Stein, Phil Town and others.
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Original:  The seminars , targeted mainly to right-wing sycophants, are held in major arenas in larger U.S. cities, and the events are titled "Seize the Day + "city name." ex. "Seize the Day URL
Revised:  The seminars are held in major arenas in larger U.S. cities, and the events are titled "Seize the Day + "city name." ex. "Seize the Day URL
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