wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council  discuss the issue.
Revised:  Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert denied that his country was planning to re-occupy Gaza, stating that the offensive is aimed at stopping rocket from being fired by Hamas into Israel . Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas has termed the incidents "massacres" and has asked that the UN Security Council to discuss the issue.
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Original: A 17-year old Palestinian boy was killed and seven others, including six children, injured in an Israeli airstrike near a school-bus in the town of Beit Lahiya .
Revised: A Palestinian teenager was killed and seven others, including six children, injured in an Israeli airstrike near a school-bus in the town of Beit Lahiya .
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Original: A 17-year old Palestinian boy was killed and seven others, including six children, injured in an Israeli airstrike near a school-bus in the town of Beit Lahiya .
Revised: A 17-year old Palestinian boy was killed and seven others, including six children, injured in an Israeli airstrike near a school in the town of Beit Lahiya .
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Original: The Indian Railways  has tied up with the Canadian transport solutions major Bombardier Transportation to produce electronic freight locomotives in the country for the proposed Rs 22,000-crore dedicated freight corridors on the eastern and western routes.
Revised: The Indian Railways (IR) has tied up with the Canadian transport solutions major Bombardier Transportation to produce electronic freight locomotives in the country for the proposed Rs 22,000-crore dedicated freight corridors on the eastern and western routes.
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Original:  Analysts feels that Railways will need at least 500-600 electronic freight locomotives, besides the same number of diesel locomotives for dedicated freight corridors in the first phase.
Revised:  Analysts feels that IR will need at least 500-600 electronic freight locomotives, besides the same number of diesel locomotives for dedicated freight corridors in the first phase.
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Original:  The investment required for manufacturing electronic freight locomotives is around Rs 10,000 crore," they added .
Revised:  The investment required for manufacturing electronic freight locomotives is around Rs 10,000 crore," the analysts said .
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Original:  Bombardier President, Transportation, Andre Navarri confirmed talks with Indian Railways, adding, We are keen to take part in the dedicated freight corridor project, but the nature of the agreement with the Indian government is yet to be finalized , said Bombardier President, Transportation, Andre Navarri.
Revised:  Bombardier President, Transportation, Andre Navarri confirmed talks with IR, " We are keen to take part in the dedicated freight corridor project, but the nature of the agreement with the Indian government is yet to be finalized , said Bombardier President, Transportation, Andre Navarri.
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Original:  Railways will come up with a detailed plan and tenders for the proposed corridor by mid-Novembe
Revised:  IR will come up with a detailed plan and tenders for the proposed corridor by mid-Novembe
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Original:  Railways will come up with a detailed plan and tenders for the proposed corridor by mid-Novembe
Revised:  Railways will come up with a detailed plan and tenders for the proposed corridor by mid-November
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Original:  Oli discussed the the situation of the peace negotiations between the Nepal government and Communist Party of Nepal ( Unified Marxist-Leninist) ( Maoist).
Revised:  Oli discussed the the situation of the peace negotiations between the Nepal government and Communist Party of Nepal ( Maoist).
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Original:  During the meeting they tried to sort out most of the issues regarding crucial arm management issue and agreed to hold fresh talk on Monday  
Revised:  During the meeting they tried to sort out most of the issues regarding crucial arm management issue and agreed to hold fresh talk on Monday . 
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Original:  Oli discussed the the situation of the peace negotiations between the Nepal government and Communist Party of Nepal (Maoist).
Revised:  Oli discussed the situation of the peace negotiations between the Nepal government and Communist Party of Nepal (Maoist).
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Original:  During an-hour long talk between Mukherjee and Oli, they reviewed the implementation of the economic package announced after Koirala ’ s visit to India in June.
Revised:  During an-hour long talk between Mukherjee and Oli, they reviewed the implementation of the economic package announced after Koirala ' s visit to India in June.
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Original:  Prachanda said that he will make his first public address in twenty five year in a mass meeting in Kathmandu on this Friday.
Revised:  Prachanda said that he will make his first public address in twenty five year in a mass meeting in Kathmandu this Friday.
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Original: The Communist Party of Nepal (Maoist) chairman Prachanda and Nepal Prime Minister Girija Prasad Koirala resumed the fifth round of peace talks today evening, following a meeting in the presence of UN Secretary General's representative Ian Martin held on sunday .
Revised: The Communist Party of Nepal (Maoist) chairman Prachanda and Nepal Prime Minister Girija Prasad Koirala resumed the fifth round of peace talks today evening, following a meeting in the presence of UN Secretary General's representative Ian Martin held on Sunday .
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Original:  It is also known when the edit was made and how long it was active on the site before it wsaq deleted
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Original:  200px The page titled:  W32.Blaster worm (link in german) was edited in a way where a link was placed in the article directing users to a site where an alleged fix for the Lovesan/MS Blaster worm, but the fix turned out to be false and the file was considered "malicious."
Revised:  200px The page titled: " W32.Blaster worm (link in german) was edited in a way where a link was placed in the article directing users to a site where an alleged fix for the Lovesan/MS Blaster worm, but the fix turned out to be false and the file was considered "malicious."
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Original:  200px The page titled:  W32.Blaster worm (link in german) was edited in a way where a link was placed in the article directing users to a site where an alleged fix for the Lovesan/MS Blaster worm, but the fix turned out to be false and the file was considered "malicious."
Revised:  200px The page titled: W32.Blaster " (link in german) was edited in a way where a link was placed in the article directing users to a site where an alleged fix for the Lovesan/MS Blaster worm, but the fix turned out to be false and the file was considered "malicious."
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Original:  However it appears that it was deleted on October 31, as the page was partially deleted on that day twice, acording to log files (english translation courtasy of google translate)
Revised:  However it appears that it was deleted on October 31, as the page was partially deleted on that day twice, acording to log files (english translation courtesy of google translate)
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Original:  Computers that were target would recieve e-mails from what appeared to be the Wikipedia.org website telling them to download the fix and including a link to it.
Revised:  Computers that were target would receive e-mails from what appeared to be the Wikipedia.org website telling them to download the fix and including a link to it.
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Original:  However it appears that it was deleted on October 31, as the page was partially deleted on that day twice, acording to log files (english translation courtesy of google translate)
Revised:  However it appears that it was deleted on October 31, as the page was partially deleted on that day twice, according to log files (english translation courtesy of google translate)
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Original:  The Democrats appear to be content with losing," said Senator Elizabeth Dole, who leads the Senate Republican campaign .
Revised:  The Democrats appear to be content with losing," said Senator Elizabeth Dole, who leads the Senate Republican campaign 
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Original: "Here's the way I see it, ” Bush told a crowd in Nebraska.
Revised: "Here's the way I see it, " Bush told a crowd in Nebraska.
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Original: Two hangers at the Kennedy Space Centre in which space shuttles are processed were evacuated when a leak of hydrazine was detected  .
Revised: Two hangers at the Kennedy Space Center in which space shuttles are processed were evacuated when a leak of hydrazine was detected .
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Original:  The leak was first discovered in Bay No 1, the hanger in which the orbiter Atlantis is being post-flight serviced.
Revised:  The leak was first discovered in Bay No 1, where Atlantis is being post-flight serviced.
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Original:  This was not a dangerous level , said a KSC spokeswoman, . “  But with any reading above zero, we would take precautionary measures and evacuate the facility ” . w:NASA | said that no workers were exposed to fumes or injured.
Revised:  This was not a dangerous level . But with any reading above zero, we would take precautionary measures and evacuate the facility ” . w:NASA | said that no workers were exposed to fumes or injured.
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Original:  This was not a dangerous level , said a KSC spokeswoman, . “  But with any reading above zero, we would take precautionary measures and evacuate the facility ” . w:NASA | said that no workers were exposed to fumes or injured.
Revised:  This was not a dangerous level , said a KSC spokeswoman, . “ But with any reading above zero, we would take precautionary measures and evacuate the facility ” . NASA said that no workers were exposed to fumes or injured.
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Original:  Officials thought that an end cap for a line that had been drained of fuel came off after the work was finished.
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Original: Two hangers at the Kennedy Space Center in which space shuttles are processed were evacuated when a leak of hydrazine was detected coming from Atlantis's Orbital Maneuvering System.
Revised: Two hangars at the Kennedy Space Center in which space shuttles are processed were evacuated when a leak of hydrazine was detected coming from Atlantis's Orbital Maneuvering System.
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Original:  Nearly 150 people were evacuated from Bay No. 1 hanger and Bay No 2.
Revised:  Nearly 150 people were evacuated from Bay No. 1 hangar and Bay No 2.
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Original:  Both the space shuttle Atlantis and Endeavour were inside the hanger when the leak was detected.
Revised:  Both the space shuttle Atlantis and Endeavour were inside the hangar when the leak was detected.
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Original: Ministers are considering a new stadium for Auckland's waterfront to replace the current Auckland stadium, Eden Park.
Revised: Ministers are considering a new stadium for Auckland's waterfront instead of an enlargement to the existing Eden Park.
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Original:  The herald said that Mr Mallard, the Auckland City Council and Helen Clark, PM of NZ, all prefer a new stadium.
Revised:  The Herald said that Mr Mallard, the Auckland City Council and Helen Clark, PM of NZ, all prefer a new stadium.
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Original:  The herald said that Mr Mallard, the Auckland City Council and Helen Clark, PM of NZ, all prefer a new stadium.
Revised:  The herald said that Mr Mallard, the Auckland City Council and Helen Clark, Prime Minister of NZ, all prefer a new stadium.
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Original:   Michael Cullen, finance minister , said that it is possible to built the stadiumunlike critics are saying , "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.
Revised:  " Michael Cullen, finance minister , said that it is possible to built the stadiumunlike critics are saying , "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.
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Original:   Michael Cullen, finance minister , said that it is possible to built the stadiumunlike critics are saying , "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.
Revised:  Michael Cullen, Finance Minister , said that it is possible to built the stadiumunlike critics are saying , "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.
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Original:   Michael Cullen, finance minister , said that it is possible to built the stadiumunlike critics are saying , "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.
Revised:  Michael Cullen, finance minister , said that it would be possible to build the stadium, despite what critics are saying , "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.
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Original:   Michael Cullen, finance minister , said that it is possible to built the stadiumunlike critics are saying , "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.
Revised:  Michael Cullen, finance minister , said that it is possible to built the stadiumunlike critics are saying : "a number of sources have told us the stadium could be built by 2011.
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Original:   No decisions have been made on the stadium proposal and he would not speculate on how the project could be financed.
Revised:  " No decisions have been made on the stadium proposal and he would not speculate on how the project could be financed.
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Original:  " The team analyzing the venues for the 2011 world cup said that it will need its report back date extended at least three weeks, possibly four.
Revised:  The team analyzing the venues for the 2011 world cup said that it will need its report back date extended at least three weeks, possibly four.
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Original:  " The team analyzing the venues for the 2011 world cup said that it will need its report back date extended at least three weeks, possibly four.
Revised:  " The team analyzing the venues for the 2011 world cup said that it will need its report-back date extended by at least three weeks, possibly four.
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Original:  The delay is due  to assess technical and logistical matters.
Revised:  The delay is due to the need to assess technical and logistical matters.
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Original: Allegations of peedophilia made against Indian holy man , Sathya Sai Baba are back in the limelight again, after the UK's Sai Youth movement was recognised as an accredited partner of the Duke of Edinburgh award scheme.
Revised: Allegations of peedophilia made against Indian guru , Sathya Sai Baba are back in the limelight again, after the UK's Sai Youth movement was recognised as an accredited partner of the Duke of Edinburgh award scheme.
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Original:  Sai Baba attracts followers from many countries around the world and many revere him as a "living god".
Revised:  Sai Baba attracts followers from many countries around the world who revere him as a "living god".
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Original:  Large numbers of youth have traveled to India to visit the holy man and hear his teachings.
Revised:  Large numbers of youth have travelled to India to visit the holy man and hear his teachings.
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Original:   During the last youth group pilgrimage in 2004, group interviews were granted to several young people.
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Original:  In a response to DNA, Sathya Sai Baba's public relations officer , K. Chakravarthi, confirmed that the youth would be arriving at the ashram in a fortnight.
Revised:  In a response to DNA, an unnamed public relations officer , K. Chakravarthi, confirmed that the youth would be arriving at the ashram in a fortnight.
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Original:  In a response to DNA, Sathya Sai Baba's public relations officer , K. Chakravarthi, confirmed that the youth would be arriving at the ashram in a fortnight.
Revised:  In a response to DNA, Sathya Sai Baba's public relations officer representing Sathya Sai Baba confirmed that the youth would be arriving at the ashram in a fortnight.
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Original:  Shitu Chudasama , National Co-ordinator for Sai Youth UK and a devotee, also stated that the pilgrimage was merely a humanitarian mission for the benefit of the improverished people in the local area, and that the sexual abuse allegations levelled against the Baba were "totally unfounded".
Revised:  Shitu Chudasama also stated that the pilgrimage was merely a humanitarian mission for the benefit of the improverished people in the local area, and that the sexual abuse allegations levelled against the Baba were "totally unfounded".
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Original: However the American Academy of Pediatrics , has described the current study as "complex and conflicting."
Revised: However the American Academy of Pediatrics has described the current study as "complex and conflicting."
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Original:   In New Zealand  only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest  in the world where circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also in Jewish and Muslim families .
Revised:  In New Zealand , only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest in the world where circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also in Jewish and Muslim families .
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Original:   In New Zealand  only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest  in the world where circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also in Jewish and Muslim families .
Revised:  In New Zealand only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest rates in the world where circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also in Jewish and Muslim families .
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Original:   In New Zealand  only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest  in the world where circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also in Jewish and Muslim families .
Revised:  In New Zealand only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest in the world . Circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also in Jewish and Muslim families .
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Original:   In New Zealand  only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest  in the world where circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also in Jewish and Muslim families .
Revised:  In New Zealand only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest in the world where circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also among Jewish and Muslim families .
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Original:   In New Zealand  only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest  in the world where circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also in Jewish and Muslim families .
Revised:  In New Zealand only between ten and twenty percent of all males are circumcised, which is one of the lowest in the world where circumcision is the normal practice in Samoa and Tonga and also in Jewish and Muslim men .
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Original:  The Royal Australasian College of Physicians said , in 2004, : "There is no medical reason for routine circumcision of newborn boys."
Revised:  The Royal Australasian College of Physicians said in 2004, : "There is no medical reason for routine circumcision of newborn boys."
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Original:  The Royal Australasian College of Physicians said , in 2004, : "There is no medical reason for routine circumcision of newborn boys."
Revised:  The Royal Australasian College of Physicians said , in 2004, "There is no medical reason for routine circumcision of newborn boys."
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Original:  Edgar Schoen is a person who has reconsidered his stance on the issue, he said: "The academy's opposition is irresponsible.
Revised:  Edgar Schoen , who has reconsidered his stance on the issue, he said: "The academy's opposition is irresponsible.
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Original:  "People feel passionate on both sides, but I'm going to recommend that we take another careful look at this," said Jay Berkelhamersaid , US Academy of Pediatrics president and professor of pediatrics at the University of Florida.
Revised:  "People feel passionate on both sides, but I'm going to recommend that we take another careful look at this," said Jay Berkelhamer , US Academy of Pediatrics president and professor of pediatrics at the University of Florida.
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Original: The angry traders protested against the Supreme Court's order of resumption of sealing drive in New Delhi.
Revised: Angry traders continued to protest against the Supreme Court's order of resumption of sealing drive in New Delhi.
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Original: The angry traders protested against the Supreme Court's order of resumption of sealing drive in New Delhi.
Revised: The angry traders protested against the Supreme Court's order in favour of resuming the sealing drive in New Delhi.
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Original:  They damaged public properties and blocked the traffics during the protest.
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Original:  Police halted over 1,500 traders from various part of the city who were vandalised public transport by blocking and pelting stones on the roads after the SC's order to resume the drive.
Revised:  Police halted over 1,500 traders from various part of the city who were vandalising public transport by blocking and pelting stones on the roads after the SC's order to resume the drive.
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Original: Woolwich Crown court sentenced Dhiren Barot, 34  to life imprisonment for conspiracy to murder.
Revised: Woolwich Crown Court sentenced Dhiren Barot, 34 to life imprisonment for conspiracy to murder.
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Original: Woolwich Crown court sentenced Dhiren Barot, 34  to life imprisonment for conspiracy to murder.
Revised: Woolwich Crown court sentenced Dhiren Barot, 34 , to life imprisonment for conspiracy to murder.
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Original:  Barot is wanted by the US on charges of conspiracy to use weapons of mass destruction in the US and in Yemen.
Revised:  Barot is wanted by the U.S. on charges of conspiracy to use weapons of mass destruction in the US and in Yemen.
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Original:  Barot is wanted by the US on charges of conspiracy to use weapons of mass destruction in the US and in Yemen.
Revised:  Barot is wanted by the US on charges of conspiracy to use weapons of mass destruction in the U.S. and in Yemen.
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Original:  Mr Lawson, prosecuting, said Barot wrote a book published in 1999 called The Army Of Madinah under the name Esa al-Hindi, in which it said Barot converted to Islam at the age of 20.
Revised:  Edmund Lawson, prosecuting, said Barot wrote a book published in 1999 called The Army Of Madinah under the name Esa al-Hindi, in which it said Barot converted to Islam at the age of 20.
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