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Original:  The study, by Professor Steven Laureys of Belgium's Coma Science Group, suggested that up to four in ten so called 'vegetative state' coma patients may, in fact, be misdiagnosed   
Revised:  The study, by Professor Steven Laureys of Belgium's Coma Science Group, suggested that up to four in ten so called 'vegetative state' coma patients may, in fact, be misdiagnosed . 
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Original:  The study, by Professor Steven Laureys of Belgium's Coma Science Group, suggested that up to four in ten so called 'vegetative state' coma patients may, in fact, be misdiagnosed .
Revised:  The study, by Professor Steven Laureys of Belgium's Coma Science Group, suggested that up to four in ten so called 'vegetative state' coma patients may, in fact, be misdiagnosed 
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Original:  Arthur Caplan, a bioethics professor at the University of Pennsylvania, expressed skepticism that Houben was truly communicating on his own, noting that the statements alledgely made by Houben were obtained by means of "facilitated communication", a controversial process by which a facilitator supports the hand or arm of the communicatively-impaired individual while using a device such as a keyboard with the aim of helping the individual to communicate.
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Original: McKeown, a 17-year-old senior from Naperville, was diagnosed with acute myeloid leukemia on Oct. 28 after she went to the doctor's office for a sore throat and extreme fatigue.
Revised: McKeown, a 17-year-old senior from Naperville, was diagnosed with acute myeloid leukemia on October 28 after she went to the doctor's office for a sore throat and extreme fatigue.
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Original:  Within twelve hours of the diagnosis, friends made plans to supply  meals to the McKeown family enough for the next three months.
Revised:  Within twelve hours of the diagnosis, friends made plans to supply enough meals to the McKeown family enough for the next three months.
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Original:  Within twelve hours of the diagnosis, friends made plans to supply  meals to the McKeown family enough for the next three months.
Revised:  Within twelve hours of the diagnosis, friends made plans to supply meals to the McKeown family for the next three months.
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Original: Administrative building of Benet Academy Students at Benet Academy in Lisle, Illinois, United States, have raised money and offered support for Jenna McKeown, a classmate who was recently diagnosed with leukemia .
Revised: Administrative building of Benet Academy Students at Benet Academy in Lisle, Illinois, United States, have raised money and offered support for Jenna McKeown, a classmate who was recently diagnosed with leukaemia .
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Original:  McKeown, a 17-year-old senior from Naperville, was diagnosed with acute myeloid leukemia on October 28 after she went to the doctor's office for a sore throat and extreme fatigue.
Revised:  McKeown, a 17-year-old senior from Naperville, was diagnosed with acute myeloid leukemia on October 28 after she went to the doctor's with a sore throat and extreme fatigue.
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Original:  Students formed an online support group and set up a mass that was to be held the next morning at 7:15 am in the school's chapel.
Revised:  Students formed an online support group and set up a Mass to be held the next morning at 7:15 am in the school's chapel.
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Original:  Several students , teachers, and parents  attended the service.
Revised:  Students , teachers, and parents attended the service.
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Original:  Several students , teachers, and parents  attended the service.
Revised:  Several students , teachers, and parents , attended the service.
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Original:  Within twelve hours of the diagnosis, friends made plans to supply enough meals to the McKeown family for the next three months.
Revised:  Within twelve hours of diagnosis, friends made plans to supply enough meals to the McKeown family for the next three months.
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Original:  One thousand orange lapel ribbons were also made the following weekend and passed out to students to wear on the Monday following the diagnosis.
Revised:  One thousand orange lapel ribbons were made the following weekend and passed out to students to wear on the Monday following the diagnosis.
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Original:  One thousand orange lapel ribbons were also made the following weekend and passed out to students to wear on the Monday following the diagnosis.
Revised:  One thousand orange lapel ribbons were also made the following weekend and passed out to students to wear the Monday following the diagnosis.
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Original:  A senior filmed a video of messages from various teachers and students, and several students shaved their heads in support of their classmate.
Revised:  A senior filmed a video of messages from teachers and students, and several students shaved their heads in support of their classmate.
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Original:  A senior filmed a video of messages from various teachers and students, and several students shaved their heads in support of their classmate.
Revised:  A senior filmed a video of messages from various teachers and students, plus several students shaved their heads in support of their classmate.
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Original:  A senior filmed a video of messages from various teachers and students, and several students shaved their heads in support of their classmate.
Revised:  A senior filmed a video of messages from various teachers and students, and several students shaved their heads to show support for their classmate.
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Original:  Kyle Marinko, President of Student Government, has announced that orange Livestrong-type gel bracelets will be sold during the school's annual Christmas Drive fundraiser.
Revised:  Kyle Marinko, President of Student Government, announced that orange Livestrong-type gel bracelets will be sold during the school's annual Christmas Drive fundraiser.
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Original:  Kyle Marinko, President of Student Government, has announced that orange Livestrong-type gel bracelets will be sold during the school's annual Christmas Drive fundraiser.
Revised:  Kyle Marinko, President of Student Government, has announced that orange Livestrong-type gel bracelets are to be sold during the school's annual Christmas Drive fundraiser.
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Original:  McKeown's illness is an aggressive  yet curable form,  one that requires two more rounds of chemotherapy and a bone marrow transplant in January.
Revised:  McKeown's illness is an aggressive , yet curable form, one that requires two more rounds of chemotherapy and a bone marrow transplant in January.
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Original:  Despite all of this, she remains positive, adopting the slogan "Be positive!" when it coincidentally matched her blood type, B+.
Revised:  Despite this, she remains positive, adopting the slogan "Be positive!" when it coincidentally matched her blood type, B+.
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Original: Miss McKeown, a 17-year-old senior from Naperville, was diagnosed with acute myeloid leukemia on October 28 after she went to the doctor's  with a sore throat and extreme fatigue.
Revised: Miss McKeown, a 17-year-old senior from Naperville, was diagnosed with acute myeloid leukemia on October 28 after she went to the doctor's office with a sore throat and extreme fatigue.
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Original: 's men national goalball team arrived in , Finland Friday for the start of the 2014 IBSA World Championships.
Revised: 's arrived in , Finland Friday for the start of the 2014 IBSA World Championships.
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Original:  Their other  competitors in pool play include top ranked , third ranked , seventh ranked , eleventh ranked and twentieth ranked .
Revised:  Their other competitors in pool play are top ranked , third ranked , seventh ranked , eleventh ranked and twentieth ranked .
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Original: The team's roster includes Jose Daniel Fernández, Cristian Santamaria, Félix Vargas, Roman Martínez, Jesús Santana,  Javier Serrato.
Revised: The team's roster includes Jose Daniel Fernández, Cristian Santamaria, Félix Vargas, Roman Martínez, Jesús Santana, and Javier Serrato.
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Original:  They are led by head coach Monreal,  assistant coach Carles Estrany and physiotherapist José Bravo.
Revised:  They are led by head coach Monreal, with assistant coach Carles Estrany and physiotherapist José Bravo.
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Original:  The team is drawn from around the country, with Santana playing for a club in the Canary Islands, Serrato playing in Valencia, Fernández playing for a Madrid based club , Santamaría also playing for a Madrid area team in , Vargas coming from Barcelona and Martínez playing for a club in .
Revised:  The team is drawn from around the country, with Santana playing for a club in the Canary Islands, Serrato playing for Valencia, Fernández playing for a Madrid based club , Santamaría also playing for a Madrid area team in , Vargas coming from Barcelona and Martínez playing for a club in .
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Original:  The team is drawn from around the country, with Santana playing for a club in the Canary Islands, Serrato playing in Valencia, Fernández playing for a Madrid based club , Santamaría also playing for a Madrid area team in , Vargas coming from Barcelona and Martínez playing for a club in .
Revised:  The team is drawn from around the country, with Santana playing for a club in the Canary Islands, Serrato playing in Valencia, Fernández for Madrid area , Santamaría also playing for a Madrid area team in , Vargas coming from Barcelona and Martínez playing for a club in .
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Original:  The team is drawn from around the country, with Santana playing for a club in the Canary Islands, Serrato playing in Valencia, Fernández playing for a Madrid based club , Santamaría also playing for a Madrid area team in , Vargas coming from Barcelona and Martínez playing for a club in .
Revised:  The team is drawn from around the country, with Santana playing for a club in the Canary Islands, Serrato playing in Valencia, Fernández playing for a Madrid based club , Santamaría for , Vargas coming from Barcelona and Martínez playing for a club in .
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Original:  The team is drawn from around the country, with Santana playing for a club in the Canary Islands, Serrato playing in Valencia, Fernández playing for a Madrid based club , Santamaría also playing for a Madrid area team in , Vargas coming from Barcelona and Martínez playing for a club in .
Revised:  The team is drawn from around the country, with Santana playing for a club in the Canary Islands, Serrato playing in Valencia, Fernández playing for a Madrid based club , Santamaría also playing for a Madrid area team in , Vargas coming from Barcelona and Martínez from .
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Original:  The team failed to qualify for the 2012 Summer Paralympics.
Revised:  The team missed the 2012 Summer Paralympics.
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Original: International security forces in Afghanistan said today that recent attacks in the country's south and east have killed four US and eight Afghan soldiers.
Revised: International security forces in Afghanistan stated today that recent attacks in the country's south and east have killed four US and eight Afghan soldiers.
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Original:  yesterday, three US troops also died in gun and bomb attacks in the southern part of the country.
Revised:  yesterday, three US troops died in gun and bomb attacks in the southern part of the country.
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Original:  "Four ISAF [International Security Force] service members died in the last 24 hours in Afghanistan," read a statement by the ISAF . Afghan officials said a roadside bomb in the Helmand province also killed three Afghan soldiers and wounded  two others on Sunday.
Revised:  "Four ISAF [International Security Force] service members died in the last 24 hours in Afghanistan," read the statement . Afghan officials said a roadside bomb in the Helmand province also killed three Afghan soldiers and wounded two others on Sunday.
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Original:  "Four ISAF [International Security Force] service members died in the last 24 hours in Afghanistan," read a statement by the ISAF . Afghan officials said a roadside bomb in the Helmand province also killed three Afghan soldiers and wounded  two others on Sunday.
Revised:  "Four ISAF [International Security Force] service members died in the last 24 hours in Afghanistan," read a statement by the ISAF . Afghan officials say a roadside bomb in the Helmand province also killed three Afghan soldiers and wounded two others on Sunday.
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Original:  "Four ISAF [International Security Force] service members died in the last 24 hours in Afghanistan," read a statement by the ISAF . Afghan officials said a roadside bomb in the Helmand province also killed three Afghan soldiers and wounded  two others on Sunday.
Revised:  "Four ISAF [International Security Force] service members died in the last 24 hours in Afghanistan," read a statement by the ISAF . Afghan officials said a roadside bomb in Helmand province killed three Afghan soldiers and wounded two others on Sunday.
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Original:  "Four ISAF [International Security Force] service members died in the last 24 hours in Afghanistan," read a statement by the ISAF . Afghan officials said a roadside bomb in the Helmand province also killed three Afghan soldiers and wounded  two others on Sunday.
Revised:  "Four ISAF [International Security Force] service members died in the last 24 hours in Afghanistan," read a statement by the ISAF . Afghan officials said a roadside bomb in the Helmand province also killed three Afghan soldiers and wounded another two others on Sunday.
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Original:  The number of foreign troops killed in Afghanistan in 2009 has now risen to 481 with these deaths , according to a tally by the Agence France-Presse news agency
Revised:  The number of foreign troops killed in Afghanistan in 2009 has now risen to 481 with these deaths ; this according to a tally by the Agence France-Presse news agency
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Original:  Shortly afterward , 300,000 birds, sheep and goats were similarly ritually slaughtered.
Revised:  Shortly after , 300,000 birds, sheep and goats were similarly ritually slaughtered.
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Original:  It was estimated that as many as 750,000 people travelled from India, which recently banned similar mass-sacrifices, to make up the majority of the million attendees at the festival . Member of Parliament Shiv Chandra Kushwaha skipped Tuesday's legislative meeting, saying that the festival had more importance as a religious celebration.
Revised:  It is estimated as many as 750,000 people travelled from India, which recently banned similar mass-sacrifices, to make up the majority of the million attendees at the festival . Member of Parliament Shiv Chandra Kushwaha skipped Tuesday's legislative meeting, saying that the festival had more importance as a religious celebration.
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Original:  It was estimated that as many as 750,000 people travelled from India, which recently banned similar mass-sacrifices, to make up the majority of the million attendees at the festival . Member of Parliament Shiv Chandra Kushwaha skipped Tuesday's legislative meeting, saying that the festival had more importance as a religious celebration.
Revised:  It was estimated that as many as 750,000 people travelled from India, which recently banned similar mass-sacrifices, to make up the majority of the festival's million attendees . Member of Parliament Shiv Chandra Kushwaha skipped Tuesday's legislative meeting, saying that the festival had more importance as a religious celebration.
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Original:  Although animal rights groups have condemned the ceremony as cruel, the Nepalese government has ignored requests to cancel the festival, which is held once every five years.
Revised:  Although animal rights groups have condemned the ceremony as cruel, the Nepalese government has ignored requests to cancel the festival, held once every five years.
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Original:  Shortly after, 300,000 birds,sheep and  goats were similarly ritually slaughtered.
Revised:  Shortly after, 300,000 birds,sheep and , goats were similarly ritually slaughtered.
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Original:  Shortly after, 300,000 birds  sheep and goats were similarly ritually slaughtered.
Revised:  Shortly after, 300,000 birds , sheep and goats were similarly ritually slaughtered.
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Original: The Kentucky State Police said Tuesday that the September 12 death of Kentucky census worker Bill Sparkman was a suicide.
Revised:  Kentucky State Police said Tuesday that the September 12 death of Kentucky census worker Bill Sparkman was a suicide.
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Original: The Kentucky State Police said Tuesday that the September 12 death of Kentucky census worker Bill Sparkman was a suicide.
Revised: The Kentucky State Police said Tuesday that the September 12 death of census worker Bill Sparkman was a suicide.
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Original: The Kentucky State Police said Tuesday that the September 12 death of Kentucky census worker Bill Sparkman was a suicide.
Revised: The Kentucky State Police said Tuesday that the September 12 death of Kentucky census worker Bill Sparkman was suicide.
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Original:  His body had been found naked in a Clay County, Kentucky cemetery, with "Fed" written on his chest and his census identification taped onto his neck.
Revised:  His body was found naked in a Clay County, Kentucky cemetery, with "Fed" written on his chest and his census identification taped onto his neck.
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Original:  His body had been found naked in a Clay County, Kentucky cemetery, with "Fed" written on his chest and his census identification taped onto his neck.
Revised:  His body had been found naked in a Clay County, Kentucky cemetery, with "Fed" written on his chest and his census identification taped to his neck.
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Original:  Trooper Don Trosper, a Kentucky State Police spokesman, said, " We  believe this was an intentional act.
Revised:  Trooper Don Trosper, a Kentucky State Police spokesman, said, " w believe this was an intentional act.
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Original:  Trooper Don Trosper, a Kentucky State Police spokesman, said, " We  believe this was an intentional act.
Revised:  Trooper Don Trosper, a Kentucky State Police spokesman, said, " We e believe this was an intentional act.
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Original:  To reach this conclusion , policeconsidered several elements of the crime scene .
Revised:  This conclusion is based on the police's analysis of several elements of the crime scene .
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Original:  They noted that Sparkman was not hanged in the typical manner . His knees were less than 6 inches off the ground, and  could have avoided death simply by standing up before he suffocated.
Revised:  They noted that Sparkman was not hanged in the typical manner ; his knees were less than 6 inches off the ground, and could have avoided death simply by standing up before he suffocated.
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Original:  They noted that Sparkman was not hanged in the typical manner . His knees were less than 6 inches off the ground, and  could have avoided death simply by standing up before he suffocated.
Revised:  They noted that Sparkman was not hanged in the typical manner . His knees were less than six inches off the ground, and could have avoided death simply by standing up before he suffocated.
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Original:  They noted that Sparkman was not hanged in the typical manner . His knees were less than 6 inches off the ground, and  could have avoided death simply by standing up before he suffocated.
Revised:  They noted that Sparkman was not hanged in the typical manner . His knees were less than 6 inches off the ground, and he could have avoided death simply by standing up before he suffocated.
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Original:  Captain Lisa Rudzinski, a leader of the investigation said , "We do not believe he was placed in that position."
Revised:  Captain Lisa Rudzinski, a leader of the investigation stated , "We do not believe he was placed in that position."
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Original:  Police think Sparkman's motives included debt, failure to find a full-time job, and a desire to provide for his son through his life insurance
Revised:  Police suspect Sparkman's motives included debt, failure to find a full-time job, and a desire to provide for his son through his life insurance
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Original: On Saturday, Doug Clifton, editor of The Cleveland Plain Dealer, said that the newspaper is trying to find a way to publish two "profoundly important" news stories, without the use of documents he states were illegally leaked to staff reporters.
Revised: On Saturday, Doug Clifton, editor of the Cleveland Plain Dealer, said that the newspaper is trying to find a way to publish two "profoundly important" news stories, without the use of documents he states were illegally leaked to staff reporters.
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Original: Tareq and Michaele Salahi from Fauquier County in northern Virginia arrived at the party at approximately 7:15 pm Tuesday night.
Revised: Tareq and Michaele Salahi from northern Virginia arrived at the party at approximately 7:15 pm Tuesday night.
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Original: Mr. and Mrs. Salahi later posted photos of themselves at the dinner on Facebook , claiming to have been invited .
Revised: Mr. and Mrs. Salahi later posted photos of themselves at the dinner on Facebook .
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Original: China is happy to host the talks once again.
Revised: China has stated that they are happy to host the talks once again.
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Original: right Last night , North Korea , after more of a year of dissent has agreed to rejoin a six-nation talk on disarming it's nuclear weapons  .
Revised: right Last night North Korea agreed to rejoin a six-nation talk on disarming it's nuclear weapons .
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Original:  The agreement was reached at  dinner meeting hosted by the Chinese and included Assistant Secretary of State Christopher Hill.
Revised:  The agreement was reached at a dinner meeting hosted by the Chinese and included Assistant Secretary of State Christopher Hill.
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Original: right Last night  North Korea agreed to rejoin a six-nation talk on disarming it's nuclear weapons after more than a year of dissent.
Revised: right Last night , North Korea agreed to rejoin a six-nation talk on disarming it's nuclear weapons after more than a year of dissent.
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Original: right Last night  North Korea agreed to rejoin a six-nation talk on disarming it's nuclear weapons after more than a year of dissent.
Revised: right Last night North Korea agreed to rejoin a six-nation talk on disarming itss nuclear weapons after more than a year of dissent.
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Original:  The agreement was reached at a dinner meeting hosted by the Chinese and included Assistant Secretary of State Christopher Hill.
Revised:  The agreement was reached at a dinner meeting hosted by the Chinese which included Assistant Secretary of State Christopher Hill.
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Original:  The statementalso considers Hill 's statements as a "retraction . "  China has stated that they are happy to host the talks once again.
Revised:  The statementalso considers Hill 's statements as a "retraction " China has stated that they are happy to host the talks once again.
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Original:  The statementalso considers Hill 's statements as a "retraction . "  China has stated that they are happy to host the talks once again.
Revised:  The statementalso considers Hill 's statements as a "retraction . " The Chinese government has offered to host the talks once again.
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Original:  China has hosted three prior talks with resultsthat amounted to nothing
Revised:  China has hosted three prior talks without substantial results
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