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Original:  The rice was distributed in 16 locations across Haiti's capital, Port-au-Prince.
Revised:  The rice was distributed in sixteen locations across Haiti's capital, Port-au-Prince.
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Original:  A spokesperson stated that they had decided to only release food to the woman in an effort to reduce violence caused by the starvation dilemma.
Revised:  A spokesperson stated that they had decided to only release food to the women in an effort to reduce violence caused by the starvation dilemma.
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Original:  The WFP gave 25kg (or 55 pounds) of rice to each women , enough rice to feed an average family in Haiti for two weeks.
Revised:  The WFP gave 25kg (or 55 pounds) of rice to each woman , enough rice to feed an average family in Haiti for two weeks.
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Original:  23-year-old Aaron Noel Camey Valenzuela was apparently discovered hiding in a crate by Channel 5 cameraman George Rodrique.
Revised:  23-year-old Aaron Noel Camey Valenzuela was apparently discovered hiding in a crate by cameraman George Rodrique.
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Original:  They were unable to find weapons of any kind on his person or anywhere on Sholan Farm , the city-owned apple orchard where the suspect was discovered.
Revised:  They were unable to find weapons of any kind on his person or anywhere on Sholan Farms , the city-owned apple orchard where the suspect was discovered.
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Original: About 80\% of supplies destined for the more than 113 thousand US and NATO troops in Afghanistan have to pass through Pakistan.
Revised: About 80\% of supplies destined for the more than 113 thousand NATO troops in Afghanistan have to pass through Pakistan.
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Original: Militants in north-west Pakistan yesterday blew up a fuel tanker carrying supplies to NATO forces in Afghanistan  . More than ten armed men shot at the tanker and fired a rocket at the vehicle outside Peshawar city .
Revised: Militants in north-west Pakistan blew up a fuel tanker carrying supplies to NATO forces in Afghanistan . More than ten armed men shot at the tanker and fired a rocket at the vehicle outside Peshawar city .
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Original:  Head of the north-western city's administration, Sahibzada Anees  said "About ten armed people fired at a tanker carrying petrol for NATO forces and later fired a rocket at the vehicle, which set alight some 78,000 litres (17,000 gallons) of fuel".
Revised:  Head of the north-western city's administration, Sahibzada Anees , said "About ten armed people fired at a tanker carrying petrol for NATO forces and later fired a rocket at the vehicle, which set alight some 78,000 litres (17,000 gallons) of fuel".
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Original:  According to witnesses, the fire was intense .
Revised:  According to witnesses, the tanker was quickly in "intense" flames .
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Original:  The residents of the areas were successfully rescued by police and firefighters and the fire was brought under control.
Revised:  The residents of the areas were successfully rescued by police and fire fighters and the blaze was brought under control.
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Original:  Police have launched a search operation in nearby areas, without any successso far . Nobody has yet claimed responsibility for the attack.
Revised:  Police have launched a search operation in nearby areas, although with no success . Nobody has yet claimed responsibility for the attack.
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Original:  More than ten armed men shot at the tanker and fired a rocket at the vehicle outside Peshawar city, and the driver and a passenger were injured in the attack, although no loss of life is reported.
Revised:  More than ten armed men shot at the tanker and lobbed a rocket at the vehicle outside Peshawar city, and the driver and a passenger were injured in the attack, although no loss of life is reported.
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Original:  More than ten armed men shot at the tanker and lobbed a rocket at the vehicle outside Peshawar city, and the driver and a passenger were injured in the attack, although no loss of life is reported.
Revised:  More than ten armed men shot at the tanker and fired a rocket at the vehicle outside Peshawar city, and the driver and a passenger were injured in the attack, although no loss of life is reported.
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Original:  Head of the north-western city's administration, Sahibzada Anees, said "About ten armed people fired at a tanker carrying petrol for NATO forces and later fired a rocket at the vehicle, which set alight some 78,000 litres (17,000 gallons) of fuel".
Revised:  Head of the north-western city's administration, Sahibzada Anees, said "About ten armed people fired at a tanker carrying petrol for NATO forces and later lobbed a rocket at the vehicle, which set alight some 78,000 litres (17,000 gallons) of fuel".
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Original: According to witnesses, the tanker was quickly in "intense" flames.
Revised: According to witnesses, the tanker was quickly in flames.
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Original:  Oil tankers and trucks bringing goods from port city of Karachi for allied forces battling  Taliban in Afghanistan have been regularly attacked.
Revised:  Oil tankers and trucks bringing goods from port city of Karachi for allied forces battling the Taliban in Afghanistan have been regularly attacked.
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Original: File:Iraq map karbala.png| The attack took place en route to a city 80km outside of Baghdad A female suicide bomber has killed at least 41 people and injured over one hundred people in north-eastern Baghdad, according to an interior ministry spokesman.
Revised:  The attack took place en route to a city 80km outside of Baghdad A female suicide bomber has killed at least 41 people and injured over one hundred people in north-eastern Baghdad, according to an interior ministry spokesman.
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Original:   Bystanders took the injured to the hospitals by car, as supposed to waiting for ambulancεs   .
Revised:  Bystanders took the injured to the hospitals by car, as supposed to waiting for ambulancεs . .
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Original:  An Iraqi female suicide bomber yesterday killed at least 41 people, including women and children, and injured over one hundred people in north-eastern Baghdad, according to an interior ministry spokesman.
Revised:  A woman Iraqi suicide bomber yesterday killed at least 41 people, including women and children, and injured over one hundred people in north-eastern Baghdad, according to an interior ministry spokesman.
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Original:  An Iraqi female suicide bomber yesterday killed at least 41 people, including women and children, and injured over one hundred people in north-eastern Baghdad, according to an interior ministry spokesman.
Revised:  An Iraqi female suicide bomber yesterday killed at least 41 people, including women and children, and injured at least one hundred others in north-eastern Baghdad, according to an interior ministry spokesman.
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Original:  A witnesss , Raheen Kadhom, said that the pilgrims were lying injured "crying for help" , according to the AP news agency .
Revised:  Witnesss , Raheen Kadhom, said that the pilgrims were lying injured "crying for help" , according to the AP news agency .
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Original:  A witnesss , Raheen Kadhom, said that the pilgrims were lying injured "crying for help" , according to the AP news agency .
Revised:  A witnesss , Raheen Kadhom, said that the pilgrims were lying injured "crying for help" .
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Original:  He said that , from standing 150yds away, he saw a "huge fireball" erupting among the pilgrims.
Revised:  He said , from standing 150yds away, he saw a "huge fireball" erupting among the pilgrims.
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Original:  He said that , from standing 150yds away, he saw a "huge fireball" erupting among the pilgrims.
Revised:  He said that , from standing 150 yards away, he saw a "huge fireball" erupting among the pilgrims.
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Original:  He said that , from standing 150yds away, he saw a "huge fireball" erupting among the pilgrims.
Revised:  He said that , from standing 150yds away, he saw a "huge fireball" erupt among the pilgrims.
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Original:  Bystanders took the injured to the hospitals by car, as supposed to waiting for ambulancεs .
Revised:  Bystanders took the injured to the hospitals by car, as opposed to waiting for ambulancεs .
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Original:  Bystanders took the injured to the hospitals by car, as supposed to waiting for ambulancεs .
Revised:  Bystanders took the injured to the hospitals by car, as supposed to waiting for ambulances .
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Original:  Coronation Street now has its own version of encyclopedia website Wikipedia called Corriepedia, which was launched on May 21, 2008 
Revised:  Coronation Street now has its own version of encyclopedia website Wikipedia called Corriepedia, which was launched on May 21, 2008. 
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Original: Image:Rovers Return tour.jpg|Part of the Coronation Street set, including the Rovers Return Inn, on 18 December 2005. ]]Thursday marked the 50th anniversary of the first episode of British soap opera Coronation Street being broadcaston television .
Revised: Image:Rovers Return tour.jpg|Part of the Coronation Street set, including the Rovers Return Inn, on 18 December 2005. ]]Thursday marked the 50th anniversary of British soap opera Coronation Street being broadcaston television .
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Original: Image:Rovers Return tour.jpg|Part of the Coronation Street set, including the Rovers Return Inn, on 18 December 2005. ]]Thursday marked the 50th anniversary of the first episode of British soap opera Coronation Street being broadcaston television .
Revised: Image:Rovers Return tour.jpg|Part of the Coronation Street set, including the Rovers Return Inn, on 18 December 2005. ]]Thursday marked the 50th anniversary of the first episode of British soap opera Coronation Street '''s broadcast .
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Original:  The programme, which was created by Tony Warren and developed by Granada Television—now branded on-air as ITV Studios—in Manchester, England, had its first episode broadcast on December 9, 1960 on ITV.
Revised:  The programme, which was created by Tony Warren and developed by Granada Television—now branded on-air as ITV Studios—in Manchester, England, was first broadcast on December 9, 1960 on ITV.
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Original:  The programme was originally commissioned for just 13 episodes.
Revised:  The original commission was just 13 episodes.
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Original:  Nearly 7500 episodes later, Coronation Street continues to broadcast on ITV1.
Revised:  Nearly 7,500 episodes later, Coronation Street continues to broadcast on ITV1.
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Original:  Nearly 7500 episodes later, Coronation Street continues to broadcast on ITV1.
Revised:  Nearly 7500 episodes later, Coronation Street still broadcasts on ITV1.
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Original:  At least one episode of the programme was broadcast every night between December 6 , 2010 and December 10 , 2010 ;
Revised:  At least one episode of the programme was broadcast every night between December 6 and December 10 , 2010 ;
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Original:  At least one episode of the programme was broadcast every night between December 6 , 2010 and December 10 , 2010 ;
Revised:  At least one episode of the programme was broadcast every night between December 6 , 2010 and December 10 ;
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Original:  The major storyline of the week, entitled "Four Funerals and a Wedding", involved a tram crash that occurred on Monday, shortly after a gas explosion in a new nearby bar called The Joinery , which damaged part of the railway tracks.
Revised:  The major storyline of the week, entitled "Four Funerals and a Wedding", started with a tram crash that occurred on Monday, shortly after a gas explosion in a new nearby bar called The Joinery , which damaged part of the railway tracks.
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Original:  The major storyline of the week, entitled "Four Funerals and a Wedding", involved a tram crash that occurred on Monday, shortly after a gas explosion in a new nearby bar called The Joinery , which damaged part of the railway tracks.
Revised:  The major storyline of the week, entitled "Four Funerals and a Wedding", involved a tram crash on Monday, shortly after a gas explosion in a new nearby bar called The Joinery , which damaged part of the railway tracks.
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Original:  The major storyline of the week, entitled "Four Funerals and a Wedding", involved a tram crash that occurred on Monday, shortly after a gas explosion in a new nearby bar called The Joinery , which damaged part of the railway tracks.
Revised:  The major storyline of the week, entitled "Four Funerals and a Wedding", involved a tram crash that occurred on Monday, shortly after a gas explosion in a new nearby bar called The Joinery damaged railway tracks.
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Original:  Between Wednesday-Thursday , a show entitled: " Coronation Street: 50 Years, 50 Moments " was broadcast, revealing the results of a poll to determine the fifty best moments from Coronation Street .
Revised:  On Wednesday-Thursday , a show entitled: " Coronation Street: 50 Years, 50 Moments " was broadcast, revealing the results of a poll to determine the fifty best moments from Coronation Street .
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Original:  Between Wednesday-Thursday , a show entitled: " Coronation Street: 50 Years, 50 Moments " was broadcast, revealing the results of a poll to determine the fifty best moments from Coronation Street .
Revised:  Between Wednesday-Thursday night Coronation Street: 50 Years, 50 Moments " was broadcast, revealing the results of a poll to determine the fifty best moments from Coronation Street .
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Original:  Between Wednesday-Thursday , a show entitled: " Coronation Street: 50 Years, 50 Moments " was broadcast, revealing the results of a poll to determine the fifty best moments from Coronation Street .
Revised:  Between Wednesday-Thursday , a show entitled: " Coronation Street: 50 Years, 50 Moments revealed the results of a poll to determine the fifty best moments from Coronation Street .
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Original:  Between Wednesday-Thursday , a show entitled: " Coronation Street: 50 Years, 50 Moments " was broadcast, revealing the results of a poll to determine the fifty best moments from Coronation Street .
Revised:  Between Wednesday-Thursday , a show entitled: " Coronation Street: 50 Years, 50 Moments " was broadcast, revealing the results of a poll to determine the fifty best Coronation Street moments .
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Original:  A humourous scene featuring the presence of Blanche Hunt at an Alcoholics Anonymous meeting was found to be number one in this poll.
Revised:  A humourous scene featuring character Blanche Hunt at an Alcoholics Anonymous meeting was found to be number one in this poll.
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Original:  A humourous scene featuring the presence of Blanche Hunt at an Alcoholics Anonymous meeting was found to be number one in this poll.
Revised:  A humourous scene featuring the presence of Blanche Hunt at an Alcoholics Anonymous meeting topped the poll.
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Original:  At second place in the top fifty moments was a storyline involving serial killer Richard Hillman.
Revised:  Second-place moment was a storyline involving serial killer Richard Hillman.
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Original:  Brian Capron, who portrayed Hillman, commented about this: "Funnily enough because it's all come back it seems to have done me a lot of good.
Revised:  Brian Capron, who portrayed Hillman, commented "Funnily enough because it's all come back it seems to have done me a lot of good.
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Original:  Friday also saw the ITV1 broadcast of a one-off game show, entitled " Coronation Street: The Big 50 ", which was partly an entertainment programme.
Revised:  Friday also saw the ITV1 broadcast of one-off game show, entitled " Coronation Street: The Big 50 ", which was partly an entertainment programme.
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Original:  Friday also saw the ITV1 broadcast of a one-off game show, entitled " Coronation Street: The Big 50 ", which was partly an entertainment programme.
Revised:  Friday also saw the ITV1 broadcast of a one-off game show, Coronation Street: The Big 50 ", which was partly an entertainment programme.
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Original:  The show, hosted by Paul O'Grady,  featured various members of the Coronation Street  cast as contestants, who were split into four teams: Weatherfield Lads, Pint Pullers, Rovers Regulars plus a fourth team of celebrities fans, or Superfans.
Revised:  The show, hosted by Paul O'Grady, it featured various members of the Coronation Street cast as contestants, who were split into four teams: Weatherfield Lads, Pint Pullers, Rovers Regulars plus a fourth team of celebrities fans, or Superfans.
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Original:  The show, hosted by Paul O'Grady,  featured various members of the Coronation Street  cast as contestants, who were split into four teams: Weatherfield Lads, Pint Pullers, Rovers Regulars plus a fourth team of celebrities fans, or Superfans.
Revised:  The show, hosted by Paul O'Grady, featured various members of the Coronation Street '' cast as contestants, who were split into four teams: Weatherfield Lads, Pint Pullers, Rovers Regulars plus a fourth team of celebrities fans, or Superfans.
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Original:  The show, hosted by Paul O'Grady,  featured various members of the Coronation Street  cast as contestants, who were split into four teams: Weatherfield Lads, Pint Pullers, Rovers Regulars plus a fourth team of celebrities fans, or Superfans.
Revised:  The show, hosted by Paul O'Grady, featured various members of the Coronation Street cast as contestants, who were split into four teams: Weatherfield Lads, Pint Pullers, Rovers Regulars plus a fourth team of celebritry fans, or Superfans.
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Original:  Wade commented that African countries should naturalise Haitians wanting new a nationality, and called for a mass adoption programme.
Revised:  Wade commented that African countries should naturalise Haitians wanting a new nationality, and called for a mass adoption programme.
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Original:  It was the largest decrease in fifteen years, since 1994, but still smaller than the 8.5\% contraction predicted by the government    .
Revised:  It was the largest decrease in fifteen years, since 1994, but still smaller than the 8.5\% contraction predicted by the government . .
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Original: The government of Brazil has granted a licence allowing the controversial construction of what would be the third largest hydro-electric dam in the world, in the Amazon rainforest, which environmental groups say will threaten the survival of indigenous groups, as well as cause the devastation of a large area of rainforest.
Revised: The government of Brazil has granted a licence allowing the controversial construction of what would be the third largest hydro-electric dam in the world, in the Amazon rainforest, which environmental groups say will threaten the survival of indigenous groups, as well as cause major devastation of a large area of rainforest.
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Original:  Critics say that diverting the flow of the river will damage fish stocks and part of the Amazon ecosystem, as 500 square kilometres of land would be flooded — as well as displacing forty thousand people
Revised:  Critics state that diverting the flow of the river will damage fish stocks and part of the Amazon ecosystem, as 500 square kilometres of land would be flooded — as well as displacing forty thousand people
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Original: File:Xingu River.jpg| The Xingu river.
Revised:  The Xingu river.
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Original:  Critics state that diverting the flow of the river will damage fish stocks and part of the Amazon ecosystem, as 500 square kilometres of land would be flooded — as well as displacing forty thousand people 
Revised:  Critics state that diverting the flow of the river will damage fish stocks and part of the Amazon ecosystem, as 500 square kilometres of land would be flooded — as well as affecting forty thousand people 
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Original:  48 of those square kilometres already flood for half the year due to the rainy season
Revised:  48 of the 500 square kilometres already flood for half the year due to the rainy season
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Original: The president blamed the  George Bush administration for the financial difficulties, saying: "Over the course of the past 10 years, the previous administration and previous Congresses created an expensive new drug program, passed massive tax cuts for the wealthy and funded two wars without paying for any of it, all of which was compounded by recession and by rising health care costs.
Revised: The president blamed the previous George Bush administration for the financial difficulties, saying: "Over the course of the past 10 years, the previous administration and previous Congresses created an expensive new drug program, passed massive tax cuts for the wealthy and funded two wars without paying for any of it, all of which was compounded by recession and by rising health care costs.
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Original:  It keeps one eye on the economy and the other on the deficit," remarked Democrat Representative John Spratt from South Carolina.
Revised:  It keeps one eye on the economy and the other on the deficit," remarked Democratic Representative John Spratt from South Carolina.
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Original:  Our economy has lost 7 million jobs over the last two years.
Revised:  Our economy has lost seven million jobs over the last two years.
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Original:  He also commented that "this budget provides a startling figure that should stop us all in our tracks ,” McConnell said.
Revised:  Senate Minority Leader Mitch McConnell commented that "this budget provides a startling figure that should stop us all in our tracks ,” McConnell said.
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Original: Photo of Harold J. Greene was killed Tuesday afternoon in an  or 'green on blue' attack at the on the outskirts of , . His death marks the first death of a United States flag officer since the and the first on foreign soil since the .
Revised: Photo of Harold J. Greene was killed Tuesday afternoon in an apparent or 'green on blue' attack at the on the outskirts of , . His death marks the first death of a United States flag officer since the and the first on foreign soil since the .
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Original:  The Pentagon Press Secretary, John Kirby, said, "There are a number of casualties as a result of the shooting, perhaps up to 15, to include some Americans . "  Kirby added, "Many were seriously wounded.
Revised:  The Pentagon Press Secretary, John Kirby, said, "There are a number of casualties as a result of the shooting, perhaps up to 15, to include some Americans " Kirby added, "Many were seriously wounded.
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Original:  The Pentagon Press Secretary, John Kirby, said, "There are a number of casualties as a result of the shooting, perhaps up to 15, to include some Americans . "  Kirby added, "Many were seriously wounded.
Revised:  The Pentagon Press Secretary, John Kirby, said, "There are a number of casualties as a result of the shooting, perhaps up to 15, to include some Americans . " . Kirby added, "Many were seriously wounded.
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Original: The attack started during a routine visit, when an individual, reportedly an soldier, opened fire with a light assault rifle from inside a building, 100 ( about 90 ) away from where Greene and others were standing.
Revised: The attack started during a routine visit, when an individual, reportedly an soldier, opened fire with a light assault rifle from inside a building, 100 ( 90 ) away from where Greene and others were standing.
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