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Original:  However, an auntof Pedro, called Catalina Felipe, he filed a lawsuit , he disputed property left by Juan Ciriaco.
Revised:  However, an auntof Pedro, called Catalina Felipe, filed a lawsuit , he disputed property left by Juan Ciriaco.
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Original:  Murillo won easily in the first instance, but made a terrible mistake: falsifying his law degree . Pedro Murillo acted with great cunning.
Revised:  Murillo won easily in the first instance, but made a terrible mistake: falsifying his law degree . This deception had been achieved with some cunning.
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Original:  First, he used that had a rector at the Universidad San Francisco Xavier .
Revised:  First, Pedro abused the goodwill of a rector at the Universidad San Francisco Xavier .
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Original:  Then, when you set a date to take the test, none other than the Attorney General of the Royal Audiencia, Murillo was submitted with the Notary Sebastian del Toro, who worked regularly for members of the audience, the notary certifies that Pedro Murillo submitted days ago, the original title, which that day was "forgotten."
Revised:  Then, when you set a date to take the examination is known only to the Attorney General of the Royal Audiencia, Murillo was submitted with the Notary Sebastian del Toro, who worked regularly for members of the audience, the notary certifies that Pedro Murillo submitted days ago, the original title, which that day was "forgotten."
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Original:  Then, when you set a date to take the test, none other than the Attorney General of the Royal Audiencia, Murillo was submitted with the Notary Sebastian del Toro, who worked regularly for members of the audience, the notary certifies that Pedro Murillo submitted days ago, the original title, which that day was "forgotten."
Revised:  Then, when you set a date to take the test, none other than the Attorney General of the Royal Audiencia, Murillo was submitted with the Notary Sebastian del Toro, who worked regularly for members of the Real Audiencia. The certificate had been submitted days ago, the original title, which that day was "forgotten."
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Original:  Then, when you set a date to take the test, none other than the Attorney General of the Royal Audiencia, Murillo was submitted with the Notary Sebastian del Toro, who worked regularly for members of the audience, the notary certifies that Pedro Murillo submitted days ago, the original title, which that day was "forgotten."
Revised:  Then, when you set a date to take the test, none other than the Attorney General of the Royal Audiencia, Murillo was submitted with the Notary Sebastian del Toro, who worked regularly for members of the audience, the notary certifies that Pedro Murillo submitted days ago, the day "forgotten."
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Original:  But a year later , when Murillo was practicing in La Paz,  was denounced as a forger of his title.
Revised:  A year later in La Paz, was denounced as a forger of his title.
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Original:  But a year later , when Murillo was practicing in La Paz,  was denounced as a forger of his title.
Revised:  But a year later , when Murillo was practicing in La Paz, Murillo was denounced as a forger of his title.
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Original:  Quoted by Judge Sebastian Segurola (friend) to present the original of the title , Murillo simply disappeared.
Revised:  Quoted by Judge Sebastian Segurola , a friend, to present the original of the title , Murillo simply disappeared.
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Original:  Authorities to raid his home discovered the medium even falsifying documents in the handwriting of Murillo . Later, no less than four notaries attest that Murillo had forged their signatures .
Revised:  A search at his home revealed documents falsified in Murillo's handwriting. Forged by him had been the signatures of as many as four notaries, as they each subsequently attested . Later, no less than four notaries attest that Murillo had forged their signatures .
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Original:  Authorities to raid his home discovered the medium even falsifying documents in the handwriting of Murillo . Later, no less than four notaries attest that Murillo had forged their signatures .
Revised:  Authorities to raid his home discovered the medium even falsifying documents in the handwriting of Murillo . 
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Original:  For this reason, Murillo not only lost the case against her aunt, but it is declared in contempt and must escape from the authorities, however, in early 1789 he was pardoned.
Revised:  In the case against his aunt, the truth surfaced. Murillo not only lost the case against her aunt, but it is declared in contempt and must escape from the authorities, however, in early 1789 he was pardoned.
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Original:   In 1805 he was part of a group that conspired against the Spanish government, but was discovered and brought to trial.
Revised:  In 1805 he was part of a group conspiring against the Spanish government, but was discovered and brought to trial.
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Original:  In 1809, leads a band of patriots who plotted and rebelled on July 16,  1809.
Revised:  1809.
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Original:  A few days later, met in a council to make public a document called Proclamation Tuitiva Board, expressed the same as the release of the Alto Peru from the Spanish Empire.
Revised:  A few days later, Murillo demanded nothing less than the secession of upper Peru from the Spanish Empire.
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Original:   After the Revolution of July 16, 1809, the royalist troops sent to suppress the revolution in La Paz , some from the Viceroyalty of Peru and the other from Buenos Aires , but by that time the troops of the regiments composed of natives would not intervene a repression of a patriotic movement.
Revised:  To suppress what had become a serious insurrection, royalist troops were despatched , some from the Viceroyalty of Peru and the other from Buenos Aires , but by that time the troops of the regiments composed of natives would not intervene a repression of a patriotic movement.
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Original:   After the Revolution of July 16, 1809, the royalist troops sent to suppress the revolution in La Paz , some from the Viceroyalty of Peru and the other from Buenos Aires , but by that time the troops of the regiments composed of natives would not intervene a repression of a patriotic movement.
Revised:  After the Revolution of July 16, 1809, the royalist troops sent to suppress the revolution in La Paz , some from the Viceroyalty of Peru and others from Buenos Aires , but by that time the troops of the regiments composed of natives would not intervene a repression of a patriotic movement.
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Original:  Before his execution made the following statement: Every 16 July , the town of La Pazrecalls the patriotic deeds of the year 1809.
Revised:  Before his execution made the following statement: Every 16th July in La Paz, the local populace honours what are regarded as patriotic deeds of the year 1809.
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Original:  Before his execution made the following statement: Every 16 July , the town of La Pazrecalls the patriotic deeds of the year 1809.
Revised:  Before his execution made the following statement: Every 16 July , the town of La Pazrecalls the patriotic deeds of 1809.
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Original:  The departmental celebration begins when the various national and local authorities turn the call Torch of Liberty is in the house of the martyr , and then a parade through the center of the city of La Paz, in which citizens torches in their hands to symbolize the torch of Pedro Domingo Murillo , parade known as the "Parade of Torches."
Revised:  A regional celebration begins when the various national and local authorities turn the call Torch of Liberty is in the house of the martyr , and then a parade through the center of the city of La Paz, in which citizens torches in their hands to symbolize the torch of Pedro Domingo Murillo , parade known as the "Parade of Torches."
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Original:  The departmental celebration begins when the various national and local authorities turn the call Torch of Liberty is in the house of the martyr , and then a parade through the center of the city of La Paz, in which citizens torches in their hands to symbolize the torch of Pedro Domingo Murillo , parade known as the "Parade of Torches."
Revised:  The departmental celebration begins when the various national and local authorities collaborate to light the Torch of Liberty is in the house of the martyr , and then a parade through the center of the city of La Paz, in which citizens torches in their hands to symbolize the torch of Pedro Domingo Murillo , parade known as the "Parade of Torches."
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Original:  The departmental celebration begins when the various national and local authorities turn the call Torch of Liberty is in the house of the martyr , and then a parade through the center of the city of La Paz, in which citizens torches in their hands to symbolize the torch of Pedro Domingo Murillo , parade known as the "Parade of Torches."
Revised:  The departmental celebration begins when the various national and local authorities turn the call Torch of Liberty at what is dubbed the house of the martyr , and then a parade through the center of the city of La Paz, in which citizens torches in their hands to symbolize the torch of Pedro Domingo Murillo , parade known as the "Parade of Torches."
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Original:  The departmental celebration begins when the various national and local authorities turn the call Torch of Liberty is in the house of the martyr , and then a parade through the center of the city of La Paz, in which citizens torches in their hands to symbolize the torch of Pedro Domingo Murillo , parade known as the "Parade of Torches."
Revised:  The departmental celebration begins when the various national and local authorities turn the call Torch of Liberty is in the house of the martyr . There follows a parade through the center of the city of La Paz, in which citizens torches in their hands to symbolize the torch of Pedro Domingo Murillo , parade known as the "Parade of Torches."
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Original:  The departmental celebration begins when the various national and local authorities turn the call Torch of Liberty is in the house of the martyr , and then a parade through the center of the city of La Paz, in which citizens torches in their hands to symbolize the torch of Pedro Domingo Murillo , parade known as the "Parade of Torches."
Revised:  The departmental celebration begins when the various national and local authorities turn the call Torch of Liberty is in the house of the martyr , and then a parade through central La Paz. Their own torches symbolising the one Murillo claimed to have ignited, citizens form the "Parade of Torches."
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Original: Biography In 17 September 1757, Pedro Domingo Murillo was born in the city of La Paz.
Revised: Biography On 17 September 1757, Pedro Domingo Murillo was born in the city of La Paz.
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Original:  At the St Francis Xavier University of Chuquisaca (later renamed Sucre) , Pedro then studied law, but left before completing.
Revised:  At the St Francis Xavier University of Chuquisaca , Pedro then studied law, but left before completing.
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Original: Tripet Kaur Gharial, better known as her stage name Arzutraa, (born 26 November 1987) is a British-Asian singer based in London, England, who sings in Hindi, Urdu and Punjabi.
Revised:  Arzutraa, (born 26 November 1987) is a British-Asian singer based in London, England, who sings in Hindi, Urdu and Punjabi.
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Original: Tripet Kaur Gharial, previously called Arzutra Garielle is better known by her stage name Arzutraa.
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Original:  Known for his supporting roles, he is best recognized in PTV most acclaimed serials such as Sitara Aur Mehrunissa , Uncle Urfi and has worked in critically acclaimed films Josh: Independence Through Unity and Mantofor which he received ARY Film Award for Best Actor in a Negative Role nomination at 2nd ARY Film Awards.
Revised:  Known for his supporting roles, he is best recognized in PTV most acclaimed serials such as Sitara Aur Mehrunissa and Uncle Urfi and has worked in critically acclaimed films Josh: Independence Through Unity and Mantofor which he received ARY Film Award for Best Actor in a Negative Role nomination at 2nd ARY Film Awards.
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Original:  Known for his supporting roles, he is best recognized in PTV most acclaimed serials such as Sitara Aur Mehrunissa , Uncle Urfi and has worked in critically acclaimed films Josh: Independence Through Unity and Mantofor which he received ARY Film Award for Best Actor in a Negative Role nomination at 2nd ARY Film Awards.
Revised:  Known for his supporting roles, he is best recognized in PTV most acclaimed serials such as Sitara Aur Mehrunissa , Uncle Urfi and has worked in critically acclaimed films Josh: Independence Through Unity and Manto for which he received ARY Film Award for Best Actor in a Negative Role nomination at 2nd ARY Film Awards.
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Original:  He is a son of late actor Subhani Bayounous.
Revised:  He is the son of actor Subhani Bayounous.
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Original:  He is the son of actor Subhani Bayounous.
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Original: Functional Assessment in Cancer Therapy - General (FACT-G) The FACT-G (Version 4) is a patient-reported outcome measure used to assess health-related quality of life in patients undergoing cancer therapy.
Revised:  The FACT-G (Version 4) is a patient-reported outcome measure used to assess health-related quality of life in patients undergoing cancer therapy.
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Original:  Finally, 13 non-cancer specific measures focus on topics beyond the impacts of disease and treatment, such as COST, which assesses financial impacts while the Facit-Sp measures spiritual well-being  
Revised:  Finally, 13 non-cancer specific measures focus on topics beyond the impacts of disease and treatment, such as COST, which assesses financial impacts while the Facit-Sp measures spiritual well-being . 
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Original:  Finally, 13 non-cancer specific measures focus on topics beyond the impacts of disease and treatment, such as COST, which assesses financial impacts while the Facit-Sp measures spiritual well-being  
Revised:  Finally, 13 non-cancer specific measures focus on topics beyond the impacts of disease and treatment, such as COST, which assesses financial impacts while the Facit-Sp measures spiritual well-being Referenc
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Original: History and Development The Fact-G was developed by Dr. David Cella, now president and Chief Scientific Officer of FACIT.org and Chair of the Department of Medical Social Sciences at Northwestern University Feinberg School of Medicine.
Revised: History and development The Fact-G was developed by Dr. David Cella, now president and Chief Scientific Officer of FACIT.org and Chair of the Department of Medical Social Sciences at Northwestern University Feinberg School of Medicine.
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Original:  Structure and Scoring The FACT-G Version 4 has 27 questions, each of which is answered using a 5-point Likert scale ranging from 0 (Not at all) to 4 (Very much).
Revised:  Structure and scoring The FACT-G Version 4 has 27 questions, each of which is answered using a 5-point Likert scale ranging from 0 (Not at all) to 4 (Very much).
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Original:  Current Usage The FACT-G is one of the most widely used patient-reported outcomes measures in cancer research along with the European Organisation for Research and Treatment of Cancer Quality of Life Questionnaire Core 30 (EORTC QLQ-C30), according to a 2011 systematic review comparing the two instruments.
Revised:  Current usage The FACT-G is one of the most widely used patient-reported outcomes measures in cancer research along with the European Organisation for Research and Treatment of Cancer Quality of Life Questionnaire Core 30 (EORTC QLQ-C30), according to a 2011 systematic review comparing the two instruments.
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Original:  Related Scales The creation of the FACT-G ultimately led to the development of the FACIT family of questionnaires for use in specific circumstances and additional diseases.
Revised:  Related scales The creation of the FACT-G ultimately led to the development of the FACIT family of questionnaires for use in specific circumstances and additional diseases.
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Original:  The Patient-Reported Outcomes Measurement Group at the University of Oxford reported that the FACT-G is a promising patient-reported outcome measurement that is worth piloting in the National Health Service as a URL Finally, The Cancer Institute NSW in Australia scored multiple quality of life instruments used in cancer care, and cited the FACT-G as "most appropriate in the cancer setting" when measuring health related quality of life in cancer patients.
Revised:  The Patient-Reported Outcomes Measurement Group at the University of Oxford reported that the FACT-G is a promising patient-reported outcome measurement that is worth piloting in the National Health Service as a standard. Finally, The Cancer Institute NSW in Australia scored multiple quality of life instruments used in cancer care, and cited the FACT-G as "most appropriate in the cancer setting" when measuring health related quality of life in cancer patients.
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Original: Ami Dar (  born January 7, 1961) is the Founder and Executive Director of Idealist.org.
Revised: Ami Dar ( ; born January 7, 1961) is the Founder and Executive Director of Idealist.org.
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Original: Ami Dar (; born January 7, 1961) is the Founder and Executive Director of Idealist.org.
Revised: Ami Dar (; born January 7, 1961) is the founder and executive director of Idealist.org.
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Original:  In 1976, Dar and his family returned to Israel and from 1979 - 1982, he completed his mandatory service as a paratrooper.
Revised:  In 1976, Dar and his family returned to Israel and from 1979 to 1982, he completed his mandatory service as a paratrooper.
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Original:  During this time Dar had an insight that fundamentally changed his thinking about borders and humanity and how labels define and separate people, which is often referred to as the "sock sharers story . "  Career In 1988 Dar joined Aladdin Knowledge Systems, a software company based in Tel Aviv.
Revised:  During this time Dar had an insight that fundamentally changed his thinking about borders and humanity and how labels define and separate people, which is often referred to as the "sock sharers story " Career In 1988 Dar joined Aladdin Knowledge Systems, a software company based in Tel Aviv.
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Original:  During this time Dar had an insight that fundamentally changed his thinking about borders and humanity and how labels define and separate people, which is often referred to as the "sock sharers story . "  Career In 1988 Dar joined Aladdin Knowledge Systems, a software company based in Tel Aviv.
Revised:  During this time Dar had an insight that fundamentally changed his thinking about borders and humanity and how labels define and separate people, which is often referred to as the "sock sharers story . " . Career In 1988 Dar joined Aladdin Knowledge Systems, a software company based in Tel Aviv.
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Original:  From 1988 to 1992 he served as the International Marketing Manager .
Revised:  From 1988 to 1992 he served as the international marketing manager .
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Original:  In 1992 he was named President and he relocated to New York City to establish their North American branch.
Revised:  In 1992 he was named president and he relocated to New York City to establish their North American branch.
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Original:  For example, I believe that in every country and every culture there are many people who would agree with this sentence: “Working with others, in a spirit of generosity and mutual respect, I want to help build a world where all people can lead free and dignified lives.”
Revised:  For example, I believe that in every country and every culture there are many people who would agree with this sentence: 
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Original:  He is a Board Member Emeritus of the Nonprofit Technology Network (NTEN), the largest community of nonprofit professionals transforming technology into social change.
Revised:  He is a board member emeritus of the Nonprofit Technology Network (NTEN), the largest community of nonprofit professionals transforming technology into social change.
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Original:  Dar was named Time Magazine 's Philanthropy Innovator (2005).
Revised:  Dar was named Time magazine 's Philanthropy Innovator (2005).
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Original:  Publications and speeches Dar wrote the foreword to " Nonprofit Management 101: A Complete and Practical Guide for Leaders and Professionals.
Revised:  Publications and speeches Dar wrote the foreword to Nonprofit Management 101: A Complete and Practical Guide for Leaders and Professionals.
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Original:  " Wiley.com.
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Original: Dar, Ami. Foreword to "  Nonprofit Management 101: A Complete and Practical Guide for Leaders and Professionals.
Revised: Dar, Ami. "Foreword " Nonprofit Management 101: A Complete and Practical Guide for Leaders and Professionals.
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Original: Dar, Ami. Foreword to "  Nonprofit Management 101: A Complete and Practical Guide for Leaders and Professionals.
Revised: Dar, Ami. Foreword to " to Nonprofit Management 101: A Complete and Practical Guide for Leaders and Professionals.
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Original:  May 03 , 2011.
Revised:  May 3 , 2011.
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Original:  Accessed August 05 , 2018.
Revised:  Accessed August 5 , 2018.
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Original:  He gave the Commencement Address for City University of New York (CUNY) School of Professional Studies on June 23, 2011.
Revised:  He gave the commencement address for City University of New York (CUNY) School of Professional Studies on June 23, 2011.
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Original:  Dar's career was profiled by Bloomberg  in 2014.
Revised:  Dar's career was profiled by Bloomberg News in 2014.
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Original: Lui Ngai Ni is a seed-sowing festival celebrated by Naga people of URL The  word “ Lu - Ngai - Ni” comes from words belonging to three different Naga languages.
Revised: Lui Ngai Ni is the seed-sowing festival celebrated by Naga people of URL The word “ Lu - Ngai - Ni” comes from words belonging to three different Naga languages.
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Original: Lui Ngai Ni is a seed-sowing festival celebrated by Naga people of URL The  word “ Lu - Ngai - Ni” comes from words belonging to three different Naga languages.
Revised: Lui Ngai Ni is a seed-sowing festival celebrated by Naga people of URL The word “ Lui - Ngai - Ni” comes from words belonging to three different Naga languages.
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Original: Lui Ngai Ni is a seed-sowing festival celebrated by Naga people of URL The  word “ Lu - Ngai - Ni” comes from words belonging to three different Naga languages.
Revised: Lui Ngai Ni is a seed-sowing festival celebrated by Naga people of URL The word “ Lu - Ngai - Ni” is coined from three different Naga languages.
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Original:  “ Lu ” comes from “Luiraphanit”, a Tangkhul word for seed sowing festival . “Ngai” means festival in Rongmei language .
Revised:  “ Lui ” comes from “Luiraphanit”, a Tangkhul word for seed sowing festival . “Ngai” means festival in Rongmei language .
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Original:  “ Lu ” comes from “Luiraphanit”, a Tangkhul word for seed sowing festival . “Ngai” means festival in Rongmei language .
Revised:  “ Lu ” comes from “Luiraphanit”, a Tangkhul word for seed sowing festival , “Ngai” means festival in Rongmei language .
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