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Original:  Using the above equation (with Tpast = 8) , he estimated that the Berlin Wall would last for more than 2.67 years but would last no longer than 24 years (the Berlin Wall fell 22 years later, in 1991).
Revised:  Using the above equation (with T = 8) , he estimated that the Berlin Wall would last for more than 2.67 years but would last no longer than 24 years (the Berlin Wall fell 22 years later, in 1991).
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Original:  Using the above equation (with Tpast = 8) , he estimated that the Berlin Wall would last for more than 2.67 years but would last no longer than 24 years (the Berlin Wall fell 22 years later, in 1991).
Revised:  Using the above equation (with Tpast = 8) estimated that the Berlin Wall would last for more than 2.67 years but would last no longer than 24 years (the Berlin Wall fell 22 years later, in 1991).
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Original:  Using the above equation (with Tpast = 8) , he estimated that the Berlin Wall would last for more than 2.67 years but would last no longer than 24 years (the Berlin Wall fell 22 years later, in 1991).
Revised:  Using the above equation (with Tpast = 8) , he estimated that the Berlin Wall would last for at least 2.67 years but would last no longer than 24 years (the Berlin Wall fell 22 years later, in 1991).
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Original:  Gott reasoned that there was nothing special about the timing of his visit, so the above equation (with T = 8) estimated that the Berlin Wall would last for at least 2.67 years but would last no longer than 24 years (the Berlin Wall fell 22 years later, in 1991).
Revised:  Gott reasoned that there was nothing special about the timing of his visit, so the above equation (with T = 8) estimates that the Berlin Wall would last for at least 2.67 years but would last no longer than 24 years (the Berlin Wall fell 22 years later, in 1991).
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Original:  Therefore, the longevity of an observable object can be expected (with 50\% confidence) to lie in the  1/3 * Tstart < Tnow < 3 * Tend.
Revised:  Therefore, the longevity of an observable object can be expected (with 50\% confidence) to lie in the interval 1/3 * Tstart < Tnow < 3 * Tend.
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Original:  If there is nothing special about the observing our species now, in the 21st century, then longevity estimation (with T = 200,000 and a confidence interval of 95\%) yields a projected lifespan of between 5,100 and 7.8 million years.
Revised:  If there is nothing special about our observation of species now, in the 21st century, then longevity estimation (with T = 200,000 and a confidence interval of 95\%) yields a projected lifespan of between 5,100 and 7.8 million years.
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Original:  If there is nothing special about our observation of species now, in the 21st century, then longevity estimation (with T = 200,000 and a confidence interval of 95\%) yields a projected lifespan of between 5,100 and 7.8 million years  .
Revised:  If there is nothing special about our observation of species now, in the 21st century, then longevity estimation (with T = 200,000 and a confidence interval of 95\%) yields a projected timespan of between 5,100 and 7.8 million years .
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Original:  If there is nothing special about our observation of species now, in the 21st century, then longevity estimation (with T = 200,000 and a confidence interval of 95\%) yields a projected lifespan of between 5,100 and 7.8 million years  .
Revised:  If there is nothing special about our observation of species now, in the 21st century, then longevity estimation (with T = 200,000 and a confidence interval of 95\%) yields a projected lifespan of between 5,100 and 7.8 million years during which the human species will be extant .
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Original: Longevity Estimation Longevity Estimation Equations The mediocrity principle can also be used to estimate the future longevity of presently observable objects, and is especially useful when no hard data is available.
Revised: Longevity Estimation The mediocrity principle can also be used to estimate the future longevity of presently observable objects, and is especially useful when no hard data is available.
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Original: The mediocrity principle can also be used to estimate the future longevity of presently observable objects, and is especially useful when no hard data is available.
Revised: The mediocrity principle can also be used to estimate the future life expectancy of presently observable objects, and is especially useful when no hard data is available.
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Original: Joseph Chennoth ( born 13 October 1943 ) is a Syro Malabar Catholic prelate who works in the diplomatic service of the Holy See.
Revised: Joseph Chennoth ( 13 October 1943 ) is a Syro Malabar Catholic prelate who works in the diplomatic service of the Holy See.
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Original: Joseph Chennoth ( born 13 October 1943 ) is a Syro Malabar Catholic prelate who works in the diplomatic service of the Holy See.
Revised: Joseph Chennoth ( born 13 October 1943 ) is a Syro Malabar Catholic prelate who worked in the diplomatic service of the Holy See.
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Original:  He has been an archbishop and an apostolic nuncio since 1999.
Revised:  He was an archbishop and an apostolic nuncio since 1999.
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Original: Joseph Chennoth (13 October 1943 – 8 September 2020) was a Syro Malabar Catholic prelate who worked in the diplomatic service of the Holy See.
Revised: Joseph Chennoth (13 October 1943 – 8 September URL a Syro Malabar Catholic prelate who worked in the diplomatic service of the Holy See.
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Original: Pope John Paul II named him titular archbishop of Milevum and Apostolic Nuncio to the Central African Republic and to Chad on 24 August 1999.
Revised: Pope John Paul II named him titular archbishop of Milevum and Apostolic Nuncio to the Central African Republic and Chad on 24 August 1999.
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Original: A LogMAR chart or Bailey-Lovie chart or  ETDRS chart (Early Treatment Diabetic Retinopathy Study)  Bailey IL, Lovie JE (2013).
Revised: A LogMAR chart or Bailey-Lovie chart or an ETDRS chart (Early Treatment Diabetic Retinopathy Study) Bailey IL, Lovie JE (2013).
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Original: A LogMAR chart or Bailey-Lovie chart or  ETDRS chart (Early Treatment Diabetic Retinopathy Study)  Bailey IL, Lovie JE (2013).
Revised: A LogMAR chart or Bailey-Lovie chart or ETDRS chart (Early Treatment Diabetic Retinopathy Study) , Bailey IL, Lovie JE (2013).
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Original:  Vision Research 90: 2-9. doi:10.1016/j.visres.2013.05.004. comprises rows of letters and is used by ophthalmologists, orthoptists, optometrists  and vision scientists to estimate visual acuity.
Revised:  Vision Research 90: 2-9. doi:10.1016/j.visres.2013.05.004. is a chart comprised of rows of letters and is used by ophthalmologists, orthoptists, optometrists and vision scientists to estimate visual acuity.
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Original:  Vision Research 90: 2-9. doi:10.1016/j.visres.2013.05.004. comprises rows of letters and is used by ophthalmologists, orthoptists, optometrists  and vision scientists to estimate visual acuity.
Revised:  Vision Research 90: 2-9. doi:10.1016/j.visres.2013.05.004. comprises rows of letters that is used by ophthalmologists, orthoptists, optometrists and vision scientists to estimate visual acuity.
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Original:  Vision Research 90: 2-9. doi:10.1016/j.visres.2013.05.004. comprises rows of letters and is used by ophthalmologists, orthoptists, optometrists  and vision scientists to estimate visual acuity.
Revised:  Vision Research 90: 2-9. doi:10.1016/j.visres.2013.05.004. comprises rows of letters and is used by ophthalmologists, orthoptists, optometrists , and vision scientists to estimate visual acuity.
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Original:  This chart was developed at the National Vision Research Institute of Australia in 1976, and is designed to enable a more accurate estimate of acuity than do other charts (e.g., the Snellen chart).
Revised:  The chart was developed at the National Vision Research Institute of Australia in 1976, and is designed to enable a more accurate estimate of acuity than do other charts (e.g., the Snellen chart).
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Original:  When using the LogMAR chart, visual acuity is scored with reference to the Logarithm of the Minimum Angle of Resolution , as the chart's name suggests.
Revised:  When using a LogMAR chart, visual acuity is scored with reference to the Logarithm of the Minimum Angle of Resolution , as the chart's name suggests.
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Original:  When using the LogMAR chart, visual acuity is scored with reference to the Logarithm of the Minimum Angle of Resolution , as the chart's name suggests.
Revised:  When using the LogMAR chart, visual acuity is scored with reference to the logarithm of the minimum angle of resolution , as the chart's name suggests.
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Original:  Vision Research 90: 2-9. doi:10.1016/j.visres.2013.05.004. is a chart comprised of rows of letters that is used by ophthalmologists, orthoptists, optometrists, and vision scientists to estimate visual acuity.
Revised:  Vision Research 90: 2-9. doi:10.1016/j.visres.2013.05.004. is a chart consisting of rows of letters that is used by ophthalmologists, orthoptists, optometrists, and vision scientists to estimate visual acuity.
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Original: A LogMAR chart (Logarithm of the Minimum Angle of Resolution) , also called a Bailey-Lovie chart or an ETDRS chart (Early Treatment Diabetic Retinopathy Study),Bailey IL, Lovie JE (2013).
Revised: A logMAR chart (Logarithm of the Minimum Angle of Resolution) , also called a Bailey-Lovie chart or an ETDRS chart (Early Treatment Diabetic Retinopathy Study),Bailey IL, Lovie JE (2013).
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Original:  the Sloan font is used (Sloan letters are approximately equally legible one from another);
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Original: Zero LogMAR indicates standard vision, positive values indicates poor vision, and negative values indicates good visions.
Revised: Zero LogMAR indicates standard vision, positive values indicates poo vision, and negative values indicates good visions.
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Original: The red queen hypothesis is a term coined by Leigh Van Valen, in 1973,Michael J. Benton, "The Red Queen and the Court Jester: Species Diversity and the Role of Biotic and Abiotic Factors Through Time", Science February 6, 2009: Vol. 323 no. 5915 pp. 728–732 in a reference to the Lewis Carroll book Through the Looking Glass and refers in evolution theory to the arms race of evolutionary developments and counter-developments that cause co-evolving species to mutually drive each other to adapt.
Revised: The "Red Queen hypothesis" is a term coined by Leigh Van Valen, in 1973,Michael J. Benton, "The Red Queen and the Court Jester: Species Diversity and the Role of Biotic and Abiotic Factors Through Time", Science February 6, 2009: Vol. 323 no. 5915 pp. 728–732 in a reference to the Lewis Carroll book Through the Looking Glass and refers in evolution theory to the arms race of evolutionary developments and counter-developments that cause co-evolving species to mutually drive each other to adapt.
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Original: The red queen hypothesis is a term coined by Leigh Van Valen, in 1973,Michael J. Benton, "The Red Queen and the Court Jester: Species Diversity and the Role of Biotic and Abiotic Factors Through Time", Science February 6, 2009: Vol. 323 no. 5915 pp. 728–732 in a reference to the Lewis Carroll book Through the Looking Glass and refers in evolution theory to the arms race of evolutionary developments and counter-developments that cause co-evolving species to mutually drive each other to adapt.
Revised: The red queen hypothesis is a term coined by Leigh Van Valen, in 1973,Michael J. Benton, "The Red Queen and the Court Jester: Species Diversity and the Role of Biotic and Abiotic Factors Through Time", Science February 6, 2009: Vol. 323 no. 5915 pp. 728–732 in a reference to the Lewis Carroll book Through the Looking Glass . It refers in evolution theory to the arms race of evolutionary developments and counter-developments that cause co-evolving species to mutually drive each other to adapt.
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Original:  The term "Court Jester hypothesis" was coined by Anthony Barnosky in 1999 in reference to the Red Queen hypothesis.
Revised:  The term "Court Jester hypothesis" was coined by Anthony Barnosky in 1999 in allusion to the Red Queen hypothesis.
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Original:  Westfall, and Constance I. Millar) have all started to use the term "Court Jester hypothesis" to describe the view that evolution at a macro scale is driven by abiotic factors more than the biotic competition called the Red Queen hypothesis.
Revised:  Westfall, and Constance I. Millar) have started to use the term "Court Jester hypothesis" to describe the view that evolution at a macro scale is driven by abiotic factors more than the biotic competition called the Red Queen hypothesis.
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Original: The court jester hypothesis is a term coined by University of California, Berkeley professor Anthony D. Barnosky  in 1999 , that describes the antithesis of the Red Queen Hypothesis in evolutionary theory.
Revised: The court jester hypothesis is a term coined by University of California, Berkeley professor Anthony D. Barnosky coined the term in 1999 , that describes the antithesis of the Red Queen Hypothesis in evolutionary theory.
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Original:  It refers to the idea that abiotic forces including climate , rather than biotic competition between species, is a major driving force behind the processes in evolution that produce speciation.
Revised:  It refers to the idea that abiotic forces (including climate) , rather than biotic competition between species, is a major driving force behind the processes in evolution that produce speciation.
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Original:  It refers to the idea that abiotic forces including climate , rather than biotic competition between species, is a major driving force behind the processes in evolution that produce speciation.
Revised:  It refers to the idea that abiotic forces including climate , rather than biotic competition between species, function as a major driving force behind the processes in evolution that produce speciation.
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Original:  It refers to the idea that abiotic forces including climate , rather than biotic competition between species, is a major driving force behind the processes in evolution that produce speciation.
Revised:  It refers to the idea that abiotic forces including climate , rather than biotic competition between species, is a major driving force behind the processes in evolution which produce speciation.
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Original:  The 2001 paper by Barnosky that is one of the first to use the term appropriates for the Court Jester side of the debate: the Stability hypothesis of Stenseth and Maynard Smith (1984), Vrba's Habitat Theory (1992), Vrba's Turn-over pulse hypothesis (1985), Vrba's Traffic light hypothesis and Relay Model (1995), Gould's Tiers of Time (1985), Brett and Baird's Coordinated Statis (1995), and Graham and Lundelius' Coevolutionary Disequilibrium (1984) theories.
Revised:  The 2001 paper by Barnosky that is one of the first to use the term appropriate for the Court Jester side of the debate: the Stability hypothesis of Stenseth and Maynard Smith (1984), Vrba's Habitat Theory (1992), Vrba's Turn-over pulse hypothesis (1985), Vrba's Traffic light hypothesis and Relay Model (1995), Gould's Tiers of Time (1985), Brett and Baird's Coordinated Statis (1995), and Graham and Lundelius' Coevolutionary Disequilibrium (1984) theories.
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Original:  History The " Red Queen hypothesis " is a term coined by Leigh Van Valen, in 1973,Michael J. Benton, "The Red Queen and the Court Jester: Species Diversity and the Role of Biotic and Abiotic Factors Through Time", Science February 6, 2009: Vol. 323 no. 5915 pp. 728–732 in a reference to the Lewis Carroll book Through the Looking Glass.
Revised:  The " Red Queen hypothesis " is a term coined by Leigh Van Valen, in 1973,Michael J. Benton, "The Red Queen and the Court Jester: Species Diversity and the Role of Biotic and Abiotic Factors Through Time", Science February 6, 2009: Vol. 323 no. 5915 pp. 728–732 in a reference to the Lewis Carroll book Through the Looking Glass.
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Original:  The  term "Court Jester hypothesis" was coined by Anthony Barnosky in 1999 in allusion to the Red Queen hypothesis.
Revised:  The The term "Court Jester hypothesis" was coined by Anthony Barnosky in 1999 in allusion to the Red Queen hypothesis.
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Original:  Anthony Barnosky, "Distinguishing The Effects Of The Red Queen And Court Jester On Miocene Mammal Evolution In The Northern Rocky Mountains" Journal of Vertebrate Paleontology 21(1):172–185 at Table 1, March 2001 URL
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Original: After Richard Nixon's election as US President in 1968, he moved to Haiti and later Jamaica, allegedly to flee accusations of child sex abuse, before returning to settle in Cotati, California.
Revised: After Richard Nixon's election as US President in 1968, he moved to Haiti and later Jamaica, before returning to settle in Cotati, California.
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Original:  Johnny Rogan, The Byrds: Timeless Flight Revisited, p.66 Michael Walker, Laurel Canyon: The Inside Story of Rock-and-Roll's Legendary Neighborhood, p.28 In some clubs, Paulekas and the dancers became as big an attraction as the onstage entertainment.
Revised:  In some clubs, Paulekas and the dancers became as big an attraction as the onstage entertainment.
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Original:  United Mutations: Vito Paulekas After Richard Nixon's election as US President in 1968, he moved to Haiti and later Jamaica, before returning to settle in Cotati, California.
Revised:  After Richard Nixon's election as US President in 1968, he moved to Haiti and later Jamaica, before returning to settle in Cotati, California.
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Original:  City of Cotati official website: In the sixties Prudence and Lloyd Draper, Cotati, 2004
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Original:  City of Cotati official website: In the sixties
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Original: Religion and music David Pugmire ’ s article, "The Secular Reception of Religious Music" explores the unique experience of reverence through music.
Revised: Religion and music David Pugmire ' s article, "The Secular Reception of Religious Music" explores the unique experience of reverence through music.
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Original:  Woodruff ’ s best definition of Reverence is, "The well-developed capacity to have the feelings of awe, respect, and shame when these are the right feelings to have" (Woodruff, p. 8).
Revised:  Woodruff ' s best definition of Reverence is, "The well-developed capacity to have the feelings of awe, respect, and shame when these are the right feelings to have" (Woodruff, p. 8).
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Original:  Thus Woodruff ’ s definition of reverence includes the combination of three other emotions: respect, shame, and awe.
Revised:  Thus Woodruff ' s definition of reverence includes the combination of three other emotions: respect, shame, and awe.
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Original:  Awe Keltner and Haidt ’ s extensive study on awe focuses on the importance of vastness and accommodation in experiencing awe.
Revised:  Awe Keltner and Haidt ' s extensive study on awe focuses on the importance of vastness and accommodation in experiencing awe.
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Original:  Haidt ’ s own work in these areas suggests that potent feelings of reverence may be associated with the peak experiences accompanying moral transformations, where, "Powerful moments of elevation sometimes seem to push a mental ‘reset button,’ wiping out feelings of cynicism and replacing them with feelings of hope, love, and optimism, and a sense of moral inspiration."
Revised:  Haidt ' s own work in these areas suggests that potent feelings of reverence may be associated with the peak experiences accompanying moral transformations, where, "Powerful moments of elevation sometimes seem to push a mental ‘reset button,’ wiping out feelings of cynicism and replacing them with feelings of hope, love, and optimism, and a sense of moral inspiration."
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Original:  This is because religion often stimulates the emotion through recognition of God , the supernatural, and the ineffable.
Revised:  This is because religion often stimulates the emotion through recognition of a god , the supernatural, and the ineffable.
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Original: One of the stories told in the book is a story about the first Arab lesbian Hind Bint al-Khuss al-Iyadiyyah, known as al-Zarqa’, and her love to a Christian woman Hind Bint al-Nu`man, who was the daughter of the last Lakhmid king of Hira in the 7th century.
Revised: One of the stories told in the book is a story about the first Arab lesbian Hind Bint al-Khuss al-Iyadiyyah, known as al-Zarqa’, and her love for the Christian woman Hind Bint al-Nu`man, who was the daughter of the last Lakhmid king of Hira in the 7th century.
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Original: " She even built a monastery to commemorate her love to al-Zarqa'.
Revised: " She even built a monastery to commemorate her love for al-Zarqa'.
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Original:  She used an English translation of the book to place the text from the chapters that deal with female pleasure and beauty "On praiseworthy aesthetic qualities of women" and "On the advantages of a non-virgin over a virgin" to "57 canvas boxes, covered with Roman script embroidered in gold thread and stacked in various arrangements."
Revised:  She used an English translation of the book to place the text from the chapters that deal with female pleasure and beauty "On praiseworthy aesthetic qualities of women" and "On the advantages of a non-virgin over a virgin" on "57 canvas boxes, covered with Roman script embroidered in gold thread and stacked in various arrangements."
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Original:  “Until the 1970's , in all but the largest orchestras the librarian had a playing position in the orchestra and engaged in part time library work to supplement his or her income.
Revised:  “Until 1970s , in all but the largest orchestras the librarian had a playing position in the orchestra and engaged in part time library work to supplement his or her income.
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Original:  Many of the musicians who developed and defined the job as it exists today are still living (for example, librarian Clinton Nieweg).
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Original:  Historically, music librarians were only required to handle acquisitions and distribution – they did not have the requirements many librarians have today to mark individual parts for performance, correct errors, work in close consultation with the music director and/or artistic staff, and conduct scholarly research.
Revised:  Historically, music librarians were only required to handle acquisitions and distribution — they did not have the requirements many librarians have today to mark individual parts for performance, correct errors, work in close consultation with the music director and/or artistic staff, and conduct scholarly research.
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Original:  “ Until 1970s, in all but the largest orchestras the librarian had a playing position in the orchestra and engaged in part time library work to supplement his or her income.
Revised:  " Until 1970s, in all but the largest orchestras the librarian had a playing position in the orchestra and engaged in part time library work to supplement his or her income.
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