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Original:  Hollis was instrumental in getting HotWired to work with Millward Brown, and this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough is noted as the first study of its kind  Elliot, Stuart, Banner Ads On Internet Attract Users, Dec 3, 1996, New York Times Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis Hollis regularly publishes a blog called "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" 
Revised:  Hollis was instrumental in getting HotWired to work with Millward Brown, and this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough is noted as the first study of its kind Elliot, Stuart, Banner Ads On Internet Attract Users, Dec 3, 1996, New York Times Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis Blog Hollis regularly publishes a blog called "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" 
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Original:  Hollis was instrumental in getting HotWired to work with Millward Brown, and this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough is noted as the first study of its kind  Elliot, Stuart, Banner Ads On Internet Attract Users, Dec 3, 1996, New York Times Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis Hollis regularly publishes a blog called "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" 
Revised:  Hollis was instrumental in getting HotWired to work with Millward Brown, and this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough is noted as the first study of its kind Elliot, Stuart, Banner Ads On Internet Attract Users, Dec 3, 1996, New York Times Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis Hollis regularly publishes a blog called "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" .
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Original:  He is the author of The Global Brand: How to create and develop lasting brand value in the world marketThe Global Brand "The Global Brand", "The Global Brand Online", 2008, accessed July 18, 2011. published by Palgrave Macmillan in 2008, and is the Executive Vice President of  market research agency , Millward Brown.
Revised:  He is the author of The Global Brand: How to Create and Develop Lasting Brand Value in the World Market,The Global Brand "The Global Brand", "The Global Brand Online", 2008, accessed July 18, 2011. published by Palgrave Macmillan in 2008, and is the Executive Vice President of market research agency , Millward Brown.
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Original:  He is the author of The Global Brand: How to create and develop lasting brand value in the world marketThe Global Brand "The Global Brand", "The Global Brand Online", 2008, accessed July 18, 2011. published by Palgrave Macmillan in 2008, and is the Executive Vice President of  market research agency , Millward Brown.
Revised:  He is the author of The Global Brand: How to create and develop lasting brand value in the world marketThe Global Brand "The Global Brand", "The Global Brand Online", 2008, accessed July 18, 2011. published by Palgrave Macmillan in 2008, and is Executive Vice President of market research agency , Millward Brown.
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Original:  He is the author of The Global Brand: How to create and develop lasting brand value in the world marketThe Global Brand "The Global Brand", "The Global Brand Online", 2008, accessed July 18, 2011. published by Palgrave Macmillan in 2008, and is the Executive Vice President of  market research agency , Millward Brown.
Revised:  He is the author of The Global Brand: How to create and develop lasting brand value in the world marketThe Global Brand "The Global Brand", "The Global Brand Online", 2008, accessed July 18, 2011. published by Palgrave Macmillan in 2008, and is the Executive Vice President of the market research agency , Millward Brown.
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Original:  He is the author of The Global Brand: How to create and develop lasting brand value in the world marketThe Global Brand "The Global Brand", "The Global Brand Online", 2008, accessed July 18, 2011. published by Palgrave Macmillan in 2008, and is the Executive Vice President of  market research agency , Millward Brown.
Revised:  He is the author of The Global Brand: How to create and develop lasting brand value in the world marketThe Global Brand "The Global Brand", "The Global Brand Online", 2008, accessed July 18, 2011. published by Palgrave Macmillan in 2008, and is the Executive Vice President of market research agency Millward Brown.
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Original:  Hollis contributed a chapter to Martin Lindstrom's 2005 book BRAND Sense, in which Lindstrom described research that was designed by Hollis and conducted by Millward Brown specifically for the book.
Revised:  Hollis contributed a chapter to Martin Lindstrom's 2005 book BRAND Sense, in which Lindstrom described research designed by Hollis and conducted by Millward Brown specifically for the book.
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Original: It is important to note that there have been differing constructed narratives of this rebellion due to the problematic political alignments involved in the Cambodian struggle.
Revised: It is important to note that there have been differing constructed narratives of this rebellion due to the problematic political alignments involved in the Congress ambodian struggle.
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Original: Hinton, 2004, p.53 In the following weeks, the revolt quickly expanded with much more destruction brought upon government property and personnel.
Revised: Hinton, 2004, p.53 In the following weeks, the revolt quickly expanded with much more destruction of government property and personnel.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.166 Following after in the early 1968, Cambodia experienced a more organized and matured second uprising that had expanded both geographically and politically through months of re-grouping, recruitment and propaganda processes, and was much more widespread and destructive than the first occurrence.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.166 In the early 1968, Cambodia experienced a more organized and matured second uprising that had expanded both geographically and politically through months of re-grouping, recruitment and propaganda processes, and was much more widespread and destructive than the first occurrence.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.166 Following after in the early 1968, Cambodia experienced a more organized and matured second uprising that had expanded both geographically and politically through months of re-grouping, recruitment and propaganda processes, and was much more widespread and destructive than the first occurrence.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.166 Following after in the early 1968, Cambodia experienced a more organized and mature second uprising that had expanded both geographically and politically through months of re-grouping, recruitment and propaganda processes, and was much more widespread and destructive than the first occurrence.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.166 Following after in the early 1968, Cambodia experienced a more organized and matured second uprising that had expanded both geographically and politically through months of re-grouping, recruitment and propaganda processes, and was much more widespread and destructive than the first occurrence.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.166 Following after in the early 1968, Cambodia experienced a more organized and matured second uprising that expanded both geographically and politically through months of re-grouping, recruitment and propaganda processes, and was much more widespread and destructive than the first occurrence.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.166 According to some academics such as Ben Kiernan and Donald Kirk, the Samlaut rebellion is seen as the initial beginnings of the Cambodian revolutionary movement (the Cambodian Civil War) that eventually led to victory of the Communist forces Khmer Rouge and the establishment of the Democratic Kampuchea.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.166 According to some academics such as Ben Kiernan and Donald Kirk, the Samlaut rebellion is seen as the initial beginnings of the Cambodian revolutionary movement (the Cambodian Civil War) that eventually led to victory of the Khmer Rouge and the establishment of the Democratic Kampuchea.
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Original: Chindawongse, 1991, p.138 Furthermore, even the Prince himself was ignorant to this highly internalized and localized conflict, believing it bear foreign instigations .Kiernan, 1982Osborne, 1994, p.193 A Localized Rebellion: Political Environment & Socio-Economic Conditions With the escalation of the war in South Vietnam in 1965, the colonization of Battambang entered a new phase as thousands of Khmer Krom families began to cross the Vietnam-Cambodia border.
Revised: Chindawongse, 1991, p.138 Furthermore, even Sihanouk himself was ignorant to this highly internalized and localized conflict, believing it bear foreign instigations .Kiernan, 1982Osborne, 1994, p.193 A Localized Rebellion: Political Environment & Socio-Economic Conditions With the escalation of the war in South Vietnam in 1965, the colonization of Battambang entered a new phase as thousands of Khmer Krom families began to cross the Vietnam-Cambodia border.
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Original: Chindawongse, 1991, p.138 Furthermore, even the Prince himself was ignorant to this highly internalized and localized conflict, believing it bear foreign instigations .Kiernan, 1982Osborne, 1994, p.193 A Localized Rebellion: Political Environment & Socio-Economic Conditions With the escalation of the war in South Vietnam in 1965, the colonization of Battambang entered a new phase as thousands of Khmer Krom families began to cross the Vietnam-Cambodia border.
Revised: Chindawongse, 1991, p.138 Furthermore, even the Prince himself was ignorant of this highly internalized and localized conflict, believing it bear foreign instigations .Kiernan, 1982Osborne, 1994, p.193 A Localized Rebellion: Political Environment & Socio-Economic Conditions With the escalation of the war in South Vietnam in 1965, the colonization of Battambang entered a new phase as thousands of Khmer Krom families began to cross the Vietnam-Cambodia border.
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Original: Chindawongse, 1991, p.138 Furthermore, even the Prince himself was ignorant to this highly internalized and localized conflict, believing it bear foreign instigations .Kiernan, 1982Osborne, 1994, p.193 A Localized Rebellion: Political Environment & Socio-Economic Conditions With the escalation of the war in South Vietnam in 1965, the colonization of Battambang entered a new phase as thousands of Khmer Krom families began to cross the Vietnam-Cambodia border.
Revised: Chindawongse, 1991, p.138 Furthermore, even the Prince himself was ignorant to this highly internalized and localized conflict, believing it result from foreign instigation .Kiernan, 1982Osborne, 1994, p.193 A Localized Rebellion: Political Environment & Socio-Economic Conditions With the escalation of the war in South Vietnam in 1965, the colonization of Battambang entered a new phase as thousands of Khmer Krom families began to cross the Vietnam-Cambodia border.
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Original:  The main government settlements were established in Kampot, Kirirom, Kompong Chhnang (Chriev) , and Ratanakiri, with Battambang having the largest settlement.
Revised:  The main government settlements were established in Kampot, Kirirom, Kompong Chhnang (Chriev) and Ratanakiri, with Battambang having the largest settlement.
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Original: Tyner, 2008, p.66 In the September 1966 election, the National Assembly was dominated by rightists with a minority of leftists, namely, Khieu Samphan, Hou Youn and Hu Nim,Osborne, 1994, p.187-188 all of which played highly influential roles in leading the revolts to come.
Revised: Tyner, 2008, p.66 Following the September 1966 election, the National Assembly was dominated by rightists with a minority of leftists, namely, Khieu Samphan, Hou Youn and Hu Nim,Osborne, 1994, p.187-188 all of which played highly influential roles in leading the revolts to come.
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Original: Tyner, 2008, p.66 In the September 1966 election, the National Assembly was dominated by rightists with a minority of leftists, namely, Khieu Samphan, Hou Youn and Hu Nim,Osborne, 1994, p.187-188 all of which played highly influential roles in leading the revolts to come.
Revised: Tyner, 2008, p.66 In the September 1966 election, the National Assembly was dominated by rightists with a minority of leftists, namely, Khieu Samphan, Hou Youn and Hu Nim,Osborne, 1994, p.187-188 all of whom played highly influential roles in leading the revolts to come.
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Original:  As the newly elected right-wing Government asserted its control over Cambodia's provinces, it penetrated into the village level and was supported by the Prime Minister Lon Nol and the army , boring down heavily on many peasants and pushing the Left towards a defensive.
Revised:  As the newly elected Government asserted its control over Cambodia's provinces, it penetrated into the village level and was supported by the Prime Minister Lon Nol and the army , boring down heavily on many peasants and pushing the Left towards a defensive.
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Original:  As the newly elected right-wing Government asserted its control over Cambodia's provinces, it penetrated into the village level and was supported by the Prime Minister Lon Nol and the army , boring down heavily on many peasants and pushing the Left towards a defensive.
Revised:  As the newly elected right-wing Government asserted its control over Cambodia's provinces, it penetrated into the village level and was supported by the Prime Minister Lon Nol and the Royal Cambodian Army , boring down heavily on many peasants and pushing the Left towards a defensive.
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Original:  As the newly elected right-wing Government asserted its control over Cambodia's provinces, it penetrated into the village level and was supported by the Prime Minister Lon Nol and the army , boring down heavily on many peasants and pushing the Left towards a defensive.
Revised:  As the newly elected right-wing Government asserted its control over Cambodia's provinces, it penetrated into the village level and was supported by the Prime Minister Lon Nol and the army , boring down heavily on many peasants and pushing the Left towards the defensive.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.168Osborne, 1994, p.192 Sihanouk's supposedly neutralist policy has its roots traced back to the independence struggle against French colonialism where the Prince forged alliances with several anti-French guerilla groups, both Leftists and Rightists.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.168Osborne, 1994, p.192 Sihanouk's supposedly neutralist policy had its roots in the independence struggle against French colonialism where the Prince forged alliances with several anti-French guerilla groups, both Leftists and Rightists.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.168Osborne, 1994, p.192 Sihanouk's supposedly neutralist policy has its roots traced back to the independence struggle against French colonialism where the Prince forged alliances with several anti-French guerilla groups, both Leftists and Rightists.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.168Osborne, 1994, p.192 Sihanouk's supposedly neutralist policy has its roots traced back to the independence struggle against French colonialism where Sihanouk forged alliances with several anti-French guerilla groups, both Leftists and Rightists.
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Original:  “The Prince encouraged his security forces to persecute the mass organizations of the Left, especially the main Leftist one, the Pracheachon, and its covert sister organizations in the countryside and the cities.”Etcheson, 2007, p.191 While Sihanouk was away in France, allowing Lon Nol to have considerable autonomy in effecting his economic policies.
Revised:  “The Prince encouraged his security forces to persecute the mass organizations of the Left, especially the main Leftist one, the Pracheachon, and its covert sister organizations in the countryside and the cities.”Etcheson, 2007, p.191 While Sihanouk was away in France, Lon Nol had considerable autonomy in effecting his economic policies.
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Original:  Here, farmers illegally sold much of Cambodia's rice to Vietnamese Communists across the borders as they paid more as compared the Cambodian government.
Revised:  Here, farmers illegally sold much of Cambodia's rice to the Viet Cong (VC) across the borders as they paid more as compared the Cambodian government.
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Original:  for Southern Vietnam or on the Saigon black market where clandestine sales were apparently handled by local Chinese middlemen who had found friends and worked in conjunction with cells of former Viet Minh sympathizers acting on behalf of the N.L.F. Kiernan,
Revised:  for Southern Vietnam or on the Saigon black market where clandestine sales were apparently handled by local Chinese middlemen who had found friends and worked in conjunction with cells of former Viet Minh sympathizers acting on behalf of the VC. Kiernan,
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Original:  1982, p.168-169Chindawongse, 2008, p.139 This system provoked an uproar by the rural population in Battambang Province where it was first introduced as many households not only saw their earnings being severely reduced due to the low prices offered for the crops  but were also forcibly made to surrender their produce at gunpoint.
Revised:  1982, p.168-169Chindawongse, 2008, p.139 This system provoked an uproar by the rural population in Battambang Province where it was first introduced as many households not only saw their earnings being severely reduced due to the low prices offered for the crops , but were also forcibly made to surrender their produce at gunpoint.
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Original: Osborne, 1979, p.192Chandler, 1991, p.164-165 Furthermore, the strong intervention and presence of the army in Battambang involved the forming of co-operatives, forcing villagers to regroup while bearing the obligation of being a co-operative member in paying subscriptions to finance loans that fell into the hands of corrupted officials.
Revised: Osborne, 1979, p.192Chandler, 1991, p.164-165 Furthermore, the strong intervention and presence of the army in Battambang involved the forming of co-operatives, forcing villagers to regroup while bearing the obligation of being a co-operative member in paying subscriptions to finance loans that fell into the hands of corrupt officials.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.177 Another cause of growing peasant resentment and unrest would be attributed  the severe exploitation or confiscation of villagers by landowners.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.177 Another cause of growing peasant resentment and unrest would be attributed to the severe exploitation or confiscation of villagers by landowners.
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Original:  Centered on rapidly growing fruit plantations, it was a conflict between a ‘rich ad enterprising Chinese bourgeoisie which has taken possession of the land, and the alienated, indebted, and already semi-independent village communities.”Blanadet, 1971, p.192 Khmer Rouge Rebels %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the larger scheme of things, it is believed that external forces, namely Vietnam and China (to a smaller extent) communists played a role in planting the seeds of rural revolt.
Revised:  Centered on rapidly growing fruit plantations, it was a conflict between a ‘rich and enterprising Chinese bourgeoisie which has taken possession of the land, and the alienated, indebted, and already semi-independent village communities.”Blanadet, 1971, p.192 Khmer Rouge Rebels %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the larger scheme of things, it is believed that external forces, namely Vietnam and China (to a smaller extent) communists played a role in planting the seeds of rural revolt.
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Original:  Centered on rapidly growing fruit plantations, it was a conflict between a ‘rich ad enterprising Chinese bourgeoisie which has taken possession of the land, and the alienated, indebted, and already semi-independent village communities.”Blanadet, 1971, p.192 Khmer Rouge Rebels %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the larger scheme of things, it is believed that external forces, namely Vietnam and China (to a smaller extent) communists played a role in planting the seeds of rural revolt.
Revised:  Centered on rapidly growing fruit plantations, it was a conflict between a ‘rich ad enterprising Chinese bourgeoisie which has taken possession of the land, and the alienated, indebted, and already semi-independent village communities.”Blanadet, 1971, p.192 Khmer Rouge Rebels %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the larger scheme of things, it is believed that external forces, namely Vietnamese and Chinese (to a smaller extent) communists played a role in planting the seeds of rural revolt.
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Original:  Communist agitators like Khieu Samphan did play a part in fanning peasant discontent, but they were aided by widespread resentment at falling crop prices, bankruptcy, and the high-handed behavior of the military.
Revised:  CPK agitators like Khieu Samphan did play a part in fanning peasant discontent, but they were aided by widespread resentment at falling crop prices, bankruptcy, and the high-handed behavior of the military.
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Original:  Some historians, such as Ben Kiernan, have stated that evidence points to the fact that the clandestine Communist Party of Kampuchea was in fact planning an uprising across the country, citing the fact that the demonstrations rapidly spread to other, widely separated provinces.
Revised:  Some historians, such as Ben Kiernan, have stated that evidence points to the fact that the clandestine CPK was in fact planning an uprising across the country, citing the fact that the demonstrations rapidly spread to other, widely separated provinces.
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Original:  though the official Khmer Rouge historiography given by Pol Pot later sought to deny this, stating its open rebellion only occurred in January 1968 and that the Samlaut incident was "premature"Kiernan, 2004, p.267-267 and surprised the communist partyJackson, 2014, p.19 “The people armed themselves with knives, axes, clubs and other weapons they could lay their hands on to attack police stations and military garrisons,” Saloth Sar later explained.
Revised:  though the official Khmer Rouge historiography given by Pol Pot later sought to deny this, stating its open rebellion only occurred in January 1968 and that the Samlaut incident was "premature"Kiernan, 2004, p.267-267 and surprised the communist partyJackson, 2014, p.19 “The people armed themselves with knives, axes, clubs and other weapons they could lay their hands on to attack police stations and military garrisons,” Pol Pot later explained.
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Original: "Weltig, 2008, p.53-54 1967 First Uprising %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Armed resistance by the Left broke out in April, erupting in the Samlaut area in Northwestern Battambang Province, a province long noted for the presence of large landowners and great disparities of wealth.
Revised: "Weltig, 2008, p.53-54 1967 First Uprising %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Armed resistance by the Left broke out in April, erupting in the Samlaut area in northwestern Battambang Province, a province long noted for the presence of large landowners and great disparities of wealth.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.179 By the evening of that day,  defeated guards from two other posts and executed a mayor.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.179 By the evening of that day, they defeated guards from two other posts and executed a mayor.
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Original:  Over the next few weeks, the rural movement caused destruction to public infrastructure, agricultural settlements, seized weaponry , and killed several army and village officials.
Revised:  Over the next few weeks, the rural movement caused destruction to public infrastructure, agricultural settlements, seized weaponry and killed several army and village officials.
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