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Original:  Her family was from the communities of Odanak, the Adirondacks and Saratoga Springs, NY where she and other relatives lived each summer to sell their baskets in Congress Park Credits In the Oxford Handbook of Indigenous American Literature, author James Howard Cox credits Masta for revitalizing the Abenaki language:
Revised:  Her family was from the communities of Odanak, the Adirondacks and Saratoga Springs, NY where she and other relatives lived each summer to sell their baskets in Congress Park Recognition In The Oxford Handbook of Indigenous American Literature, author James Howard Cox credits Masta for revitalizing the Abenaki language:
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Original: Further Reading Fisher, M.*, Khan, A., and Atamturktur, S. (accepted, in press), “Scour Monitoring Via Turbulent Open Channel Flow,” Measurement Science and Technology (IOP Science).
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Original:  Tidal scour is an erosion process which is carried out by the tidal movement of water . Examples of this hydrological process can be found in many areas of the world .
Revised: Introduction Tidal scour is an erosion process which is carried out by the tidal movement of water . Examples of this hydrological process can be found in many areas of the world .
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Original:  Tidal scour is an erosion process which is carried out by the tidal movement of water . Examples of this hydrological process can be found in many areas of the world .
Revised:  Tidal scour is “sea-floor erosion caused by strong tidal currents resulting in the removal of inshore sediments and formation of deep holes and channels” . Examples of this hydrological process can be found in many areas of the world .
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Original:  Tidal scour is an erosion process which is carried out by the tidal movement of water . Examples of this hydrological process can be found in many areas of the world .
Revised:  Tidal scour is an erosion process which is carried out by the tidal movement of water . Examples of this hydrological process can be found globally .
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Original:  This can be seen in: · Increased transport of agricultural runoff, such as DDT-laden sediment, introduced by increased tidal scour.
Revised:  This can be seen in: Increased transport of agricultural runoff, such as DDT-laden sediment, introduced by increased tidal scour.
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Original:  · The loss of benthic organisms as the channels deepen more than organisms can persist
Revised:  The loss of benthic organisms as the channels deepen more than organisms can persist
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Original:  On the assumption that all the oxygen is used to oxidize degradable fuels and all the CO , thereby evolved is recovered, it is possible to calculate the total amount of energy produced.
Revised:  On the assumption that all the oxygen is used to oxidize degradable fuels and all the CO2 , thereby evolved is recovered, it is possible to calculate the total amount of energy produced.
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Original:  Indirect calorimetry has influenced everyday practices of medical and surgical care, such as the warming of burn unit and surgical suites and the weaning of patients from ventilators. Crusty
Revised:  Indirect calorimetry has influenced everyday practices of medical and surgical care, such as the warming of burn unit and surgical suites and the weaning of patients from ventilators. 
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Original:  Indirect calorimetry is the method by which the type and rate of substrate utilization , and energy metabolism are estimated in vivo starting from gas exchange measurements (  carbon dioxide production and oxygen consumption during rest and steady-state exercise).
Revised:  Indirect calorimetry estimates the type and rate of substrate utilization , and energy metabolism are estimated in vivo starting from gas exchange measurements ( carbon dioxide production and oxygen consumption during rest and steady-state exercise).
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Original:  Indirect calorimetry is the method by which the type and rate of substrate utilization , and energy metabolism are estimated in vivo starting from gas exchange measurements (  carbon dioxide production and oxygen consumption during rest and steady-state exercise).
Revised:  Indirect calorimetry is the method by which the type and rate of substrate utilization and energy metabolism are estimated in vivo starting from gas exchange measurements ( carbon dioxide production and oxygen consumption during rest and steady-state exercise).
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Original:  Indirect calorimetry is the method by which the type and rate of substrate utilization , and energy metabolism are estimated in vivo starting from gas exchange measurements (  carbon dioxide production and oxygen consumption during rest and steady-state exercise).
Revised:  Indirect calorimetry is the method by which the type and rate of substrate utilization , and energy metabolism in vivo starting from gas exchange measurements ( carbon dioxide production and oxygen consumption during rest and steady-state exercise).
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Original:  Indirect calorimetry is the method by which the type and rate of substrate utilization , and energy metabolism are estimated in vivo starting from gas exchange measurements (  carbon dioxide production and oxygen consumption during rest and steady-state exercise).
Revised:  Indirect calorimetry is the method by which the type and rate of substrate utilization , and energy metabolism are estimated in vivo starting from gas exchange measurements ( carbon dioxide production during rest and steady-state exercise).
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Original:  On the assumption that all the oxygen is used to oxidize degradable fuels and all the CO2 , thereby evolved is recovered, it is possible to calculate the total amount of energy produced.
Revised:  On the assumption that all the oxygen is used to oxidize degradable fuels and all the CO2 thereby evolved is recovered, it is possible to calculate the total amount of energy produced.
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Original:  It should be clear that “ energy production” means conversion of the chemical free-energy of nutrients into the chemical energy of ATP plus loss of some energy during the oxidation process.
Revised:  “ energy production” means conversion of the chemical free-energy of nutrients into the chemical energy of ATP plus loss of some energy during the oxidation process.
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Original:  It should be clear that “ energy production” means conversion of the chemical free-energy of nutrients into the chemical energy of ATP plus loss of some energy during the oxidation process.
Revised:  It should be clear that “ Energy production” means conversion of the chemical free-energy of nutrients into the chemical energy of ATP plus loss of some energy during the oxidation process.
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Original:  Respiratory indirect calorimetry , or indirect calorimetry (IC) as it is known by most authors, is a noninvasive and highly accurate method of metabolic rate  which has an error rate lower than 1\%.
Revised:  Respiratory indirect calorimetry (IC) as it is known by most authors, is a noninvasive and highly accurate method of metabolic rate which has an error rate lower than 1\%.
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Original:  Respiratory indirect calorimetry , or indirect calorimetry (IC) as it is known by most authors, is a noninvasive and highly accurate method of metabolic rate  which has an error rate lower than 1\%.
Revised:  Respiratory indirect calorimetry , or indirect calorimetry (IC) is a noninvasive and highly accurate method of metabolic rate which has an error rate lower than 1\%.
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Original:  Respiratory indirect calorimetry , or indirect calorimetry (IC) as it is known by most authors, is a noninvasive and highly accurate method of metabolic rate  which has an error rate lower than 1\%.
Revised:  Respiratory indirect calorimetry , or indirect calorimetry (IC) as it is known by most authors, is a noninvasive and highly accurate method of metabolic rate , which has an error rate lower than 1\%.
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Original:  Respiratory indirect calorimetry , or indirect calorimetry (IC) as it is known by most authors, is a noninvasive and highly accurate method of metabolic rate  which has an error rate lower than 1\%.
Revised:  Respiratory indirect calorimetry , or indirect calorimetry (IC) as it is known by most authors, is a noninvasive and highly accurate method of metabolic rate which has an error of less than 1\%.
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Original:  This method allows estimating BEE and REE , and also allows for identification of energy substrates that are being predominantly metabolized by the body at a specific moment.
Revised:  This method allows estimating BEE and REE as well as identification of energy substrates that are being predominantly metabolized by the body at a specific moment.
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Original:  This method allows estimating BEE and REE , and also allows for identification of energy substrates that are being predominantly metabolized by the body at a specific moment.
Revised:  This method allows estimating BEE and REE , and also allows for identification of energy substrates that are predominantly metabolized by the body at a specific moment.
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Original:  It is based on the indirect measure of the heat produced by oxidation of macronutrients, which is estimated by monitoring oxygen consumption ( O2 ) and carbon dioxide production ( CO2 ) for a certain period of time.
Revised:  It is based on the indirect measurement of the heat produced by oxidation of macronutrients, which is estimated by monitoring oxygen consumption ( O2 ) and carbon dioxide production ( CO2 ) for a certain period of time.
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Original:  It is based on the indirect measure of the heat produced by oxidation of macronutrients, which is estimated by monitoring oxygen consumption ( O2 ) and carbon dioxide production ( CO2 ) for a certain period of time.
Revised:  It is based on the indirect measure of the heat produced by oxidation of macronutrients, which is estimated by monitoring O2 ) and carbon dioxide production ( CO2 ) for a certain period of time.
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Original:  It is based on the indirect measure of the heat produced by oxidation of macronutrients, which is estimated by monitoring oxygen consumption ( O2 ) and carbon dioxide production ( CO2 ) for a certain period of time.
Revised:  It is based on the indirect measure of the heat produced by oxidation of macronutrients, which is estimated by monitoring oxygen consumption ( O2 consumption and CO2 ) for a certain period of time.
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Original:  It is based on the indirect measure of the heat produced by oxidation of macronutrients, which is estimated by monitoring oxygen consumption ( O2 ) and carbon dioxide production ( CO2 ) for a certain period of time.
Revised:  It is based on the indirect measure of the heat produced by oxidation of macronutrients, which is estimated by monitoring oxygen consumption ( O2 ) and carbon dioxide production ( CO2 production for a certain period of time.
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Original:  The calorimeter has a gas collector that adapts to the subject and a system that measures the volume and concentrations of O2 and CO2 minute by minute .
Revised:  The calorimeter has a gas collector that adapts to the subject and through a unidirectional valve minute by minute .
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Original:  The Dynamic Energy Budget theory explains why this procedure  is correct.
Revised:  The Dynamic Energy Budget theory explains why this procedure and Dynamic Energy Budget theory is correct.
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Original:  Collection methods Four different gas collection and measurement techniques can be used to perform this test: Douglas Bag: expired respiratory gases are collected on an inflatable airtight bag.
Revised:  Collection methods Four different gas collection and measurement techniques can be used to perform this test: Douglas Bag: Expired respiratory gases are collected on an inflatable airtight bag.
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Original:  "Energy production" means conversion of the chemical energy of oxygen Schmidt-Rohr , K. (2020).
Revised:  "Energy production" means conversion of the chemical energy of oxygenSchmidt-Rohr , K. (2020).
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Original:  A generalized bond-energy analysis showing O2 as a high-energy molecule due to its relatively weak double bond Schmidt-Rohr , K. (2015).
Revised:  A generalized bond-energy analysis showing O2 as a high-energy molecule due to its relatively weak double bondSchmidt-Rohr , K. (2015).
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Original: Biography David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born 20 August 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache  and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
Revised: Biography David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born 20 August 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache ) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
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Original:  He painted in the flat-style painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s-1960s . Biography David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born 20 August 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
Revised:  He painted in the Flatstyle painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s-1960s . Biography David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born 20 August 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
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Original:  He painted in the flat-style painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s-1960s . Biography David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born 20 August 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
Revised:  He painted in the flat-style painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s to the 1960s . Biography David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born 20 August 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
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Original:  He painted in the flat-style painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s-1960s . Biography David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born 20 August 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
Revised:  He painted in the flat-style painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s-1960s . Background David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born 20 August 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
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Original:  He painted in the flat-style painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s-1960s . Biography David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born 20 August 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
Revised:  He painted in the flat-style painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s-1960s . Biography David Emmett Williams (native name: Tos-que) was born August 20, 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
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Original:   Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with contemporary Native American painters, Joan Hill , Doc Tate Nevaquaya , and Bert Seabourn under Dick West , but did not become a serious painter until 1959.
Revised:  Education Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with contemporary Native American painters, Joan Hill , Doc Tate Nevaquaya , and Bert Seabourn under Dick West , but did not become a serious painter until 1959.
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Original:   Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with contemporary Native American painters, Joan Hill , Doc Tate Nevaquaya , and Bert Seabourn under Dick West , but did not become a serious painter until 1959.
Revised:  Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with fellow Native American painters, Joan Hill , Doc Tate Nevaquaya , and Bert Seabourn under Dick West , but did not become a serious painter until 1959.
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Original:   Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with contemporary Native American painters, Joan Hill , Doc Tate Nevaquaya , and Bert Seabourn under Dick West , but did not become a serious painter until 1959.
Revised:  Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with contemporary Native American painters, Joan Hill and Doc Tate Nevaquaya , and Bert Seabourn under Dick West , but did not become a serious painter until 1959.
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Original:   Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with contemporary Native American painters, Joan Hill , Doc Tate Nevaquaya , and Bert Seabourn under Dick West , but did not become a serious painter until 1959.
Revised:  Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with contemporary Native American painters, Joan Hill , Doc Tate Nevaquaya under Dick West , but did not become a serious painter until 1959.
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Original:   Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with contemporary Native American painters, Joan Hill , Doc Tate Nevaquaya , and Bert Seabourn under Dick West , but did not become a serious painter until 1959.
Revised:  Williams studied at the Indian Art Center in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, under Olle Nordmark and later at Bacone College with contemporary Native American painters, Joan Hill , Doc Tate Nevaquaya , and Bert Seabourn under Dick West . Williams did not pursue painting seriously until 1959.
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Original:  All of the artists of this period at Bacone were taught the flat-style painting technique, which was required for the Philbrook Museum of Art annual competitions . Philbrook and Bacone had an agreement in the 1940s – 1960s period whereby student's work would be hung and offered for sale, with the school garnering one third of the profits of any sale.
Revised:  All of the artists of this period at Bacone were taught the flat-style painting technique, which was often showcased at the Philbrook Museum of Art annual competitions . Philbrook and Bacone had an agreement in the 1940s – 1960s period whereby student's work would be hung and offered for sale, with the school garnering one third of the profits of any sale.
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Original:  All of the artists of this period at Bacone were taught the flat-style painting technique, which was required for the Philbrook Museum of Art annual competitions . Philbrook and Bacone had an agreement in the 1940s – 1960s period whereby student's work would be hung and offered for sale, with the school garnering one third of the profits of any sale.
Revised:  All of the artists of this period at Bacone were taught the flat-style painting technique, which was required for the Philbrook Museum of Art annual competitions . Philbrook and Bacone had an agreement in the 1940s through the 1960s period whereby student's work would be hung and offered for sale, with the school garnering one third of the profits of any sale.
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Original:   Williams participated in the annual competitions and was one of the Grand Award winners in the early 1960s.
Revised:  Art career Williams participated in the annual competitions and was one of the Grand Award winners in the early 1960s.
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Original:  Actor Vincent Price, who at the time was working as a Native American art expert , purchased 50 of William's paintings to sell through Sears Roebuck's Fine Arts Collection nationwide.
Revised:  Actor Vincent Price, who was a major collector and advocate of Native American art expert , purchased 50 of William's paintings to sell through Sears Roebuck's Fine Arts Collection nationwide.
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Original:  Actor Vincent Price, who at the time was working as a Native American art expert , purchased 50 of William's paintings to sell through Sears Roebuck's Fine Arts Collection nationwide.
Revised:  Actor Vincent Price, who at the time was working as a Native American art , purchased 50 of William's paintings to sell through Sears Roebuck's Fine Arts Collection nationwide.
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Original:  That same year, he also did a two man show with sand painter, David Villasenor, at the Pasadena Public Library.
Revised:  That same year, he also did a two-man show with sand painter, David Villasenor, at the Pasadena Public Library.
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Original:  In   1972, Williams participated in the  Contemporary Southern Plains Indian Painting Exhibition tour sponsored by the Southern Plains Indian Museum and the Oklahoma Indian Arts and Crafts Co-operative of Anadarko.
Revised:  1972, Williams participated in the Contemporary Southern Plains Indian Painting Exhibition tour sponsored by the Southern Plains Indian Museum and the Oklahoma Indian Arts and Crafts Co-operative of Anadarko.
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Original:  In   1972, Williams participated in the  Contemporary Southern Plains Indian Painting Exhibition tour sponsored by the Southern Plains Indian Museum and the Oklahoma Indian Arts and Crafts Co-operative of Anadarko.
Revised:  In 1972, Williams participated in the Contemporary Southern Plains Indian Painting , sponsored by the Southern Plains Indian Museum and the Oklahoma Indian Arts and Crafts Co-operative of Anadarko.
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Original:  In 1974, he won the Grand Prize at the Trail of Tears Art show at the Cherokee Heritage Center.
Revised:  In 1974, he won the Grand Prize at the Trail of Tears Art Show at the Cherokee Heritage Center.
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Original:  During his lifetime, Williams had multiple and profitable exhibits throughout the United States including at the Arizona State Museum at the University of Arizona in Tucson;
Revised:  During his lifetime, Williams had multiple and profitable exhibitions throughout the United States including at the Arizona State Museum at the University of Arizona in Tucson;
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Original:   Besides in private collections, Williams’ work is part of the permanent collections in museums including the Cherokee Heritage Center in Park Hill, Oklahoma;
Revised:  Public collections Besides in private collections, Williams’ work is part of the permanent collections in museums including the Cherokee Heritage Center in Park Hill, Oklahoma;
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Original:  Williams died in November, 1985 of complications of diabetes.
Revised:  Death Williams died in November, 1985 of complications of diabetes.
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