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Original:  I may  still, but at this point I am leaving my options open.
Revised:  I may still, but at this point I 'm just leaving my options open.
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Original:  What I basically wanted to ask was what sort of changes you've seen with the Paralympics over that time – 1992 to 2012 Amanda Carter: I think the biggest change has been the professionalism of Paralympic sports.
Revised:  What I basically wanted to ask was what sort of changes you've seen with the Paralympics over that time — 1992 to 2012 Amanda Carter: I think the biggest change has been the professionalism of Paralympic sports.
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Original:  And at that point got a pressure sore, and decided not to travel, because I thought the risk of travelling with the pressure sore was an additional complication, and at that point APC were also saying that if I was to go overseas, because I had a "pre existing" elbow injury, that they wouldn't cover me insurance-wise.
Revised:  And at that point got a pressure sore, and decided not to travel, because I thought the risk of travelling with the pressure sore was an additional complication, and at that point were also saying that if I was to go overseas, because I had a "pre existing" elbow injury, that they wouldn't cover me insurance-wise.
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Original:  What I basically wanted to ask was what sort of changes you've seen with the Paralympics over that time — 1992 to 2012 Amanda Carter: I think the biggest change has been the professionalism of Paralympic sports.
Revised:  What I basically wanted to ask was what sort of changes you've seen with the Paralympics over that time — 1992 to 2012. Amanda Carter: I think the biggest change has been the professionalism of Paralympic sports.
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Original:  What I basically wanted to ask was what sort of changes you've seen with the Paralympics over that time — 1992 to 2012 Amanda Carter: I think the biggest change has been the professionalism of Paralympic sports.
Revised:  What I basically wanted to ask was what sort of changes you've seen with the Paralympics over that time — 1992 to 2012 Amanda Carter: I think the biggest change has been professionalism of Paralympic sports.
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Original:  I think way back in 1992 , especially in basketball, I guess, was that there weren't that many girls and as long as you trained a couple of times a week, and those sorts of things, you could pretty much make the team.
Revised:  I think way back in '92 , especially in basketball, I guess, was that there weren't that many girls and as long as you trained a couple of times a week, and those sorts of things, you could pretty much make the team.
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Original:  This campaign, we had certainly a lot more than  twelve girls who were vying for those twelve positions.
Revised:  This campaign, certainly, we've had a lot more than twelve girls who were vying for those twelve positions.
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Original:  This campaign, we had certainly a lot more than  twelve girls who were vying for those twelve positions.
Revised:  This campaign, we had certainly a lot more than the twelve girls who were vying for those twelve positions.
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Original:  Like, I remember for 2012 I'd still go and train, say, four, five times a week,  mostly shooting and things like that, but now it's not just about the shooting  skills, it's very much all the gym sessions, the strength and conditioning.
Revised:  Like, I remember for 2012 I'd still go and train, say, four, five times a week, and that's mostly shooting and things like that, but now it's not just about the shooting skills, it's very much all the gym sessions, the strength and conditioning.
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Original:  So the level of commitment and the skill level  has improved enormously over that twenty years.
Revised:  So the level of commitment and the skill level of the team has improved enormously over that twenty years.
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Original:  I think also the public's view of the Paralympics has changed a lot, in that it was seen more as, "oh, isn't it good that they're participating" in 1992, whereas I think the general public understands the professionalism of athletes now in the Paralympics.
Revised:  I think also the public's view of the Paralympics has changed a lot, in that it was seen more as, "oh, isn't it good that they're participating" in 1992, where I think the general public understands the professionalism of athletes now in the Paralympics.
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Original:  To me... London... the coverage on TV in Britain , but also here, some countries are ahead of others, but  it's being treated like the Olympics . Amanda Carter: Yeah!
Revised:  To me... London... the coverage on in , but also here, some countries are ahead of others, but it's being treated like the Olympics . Amanda Carter: Yeah!
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Original:  To me... London... the coverage on TV in Britain , but also here, some countries are ahead of others, but  it's being treated like the Olympics . Amanda Carter: Yeah!
Revised:  To me... London... the coverage on TV in Britain , but also here, some countries are ahead of others, but basically it's being treated like the Olympics . Amanda Carter: Yeah!
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Original:  To me... London... the coverage on TV in Britain , but also here, some countries are ahead of others, but  it's being treated like the Olympics . Amanda Carter: Yeah!
Revised:  To me... London... the coverage on TV in Britain , but also here, some countries are ahead of others, but it's being treated like the . Amanda Carter: Yeah!
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Original:  Yeah. There wasn't a lot of difference  .
Revised:  Yeah. There wasn't a lot of difference between .
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Original:  The seats went up and up  ! And as it was filling on the night, you could see that even that top deck had people sitting in it.
Revised:  The seats went up and up and up ! And as it was filling on the night, you could see that even that top deck had people sitting in it.
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Original:  I saw school groups at the football and the goalball , but not at the basketball.
Revised:  I saw school groups at the football and the , but not at the basketball.
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Original:  Amanda Carter:  Which is a big difference !
Revised:  Amanda Carter: No. Which is a big difference !
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Original:  I was very , very impressed with the standard of play.
Revised:  I was very impressed with the standard of play.
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Original:  So we've got the next rung of girls and guys coming through the group.
Revised:  So we've got the next rung of girls , and guys, coming through the group.
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Original:  Like, we've got girls that weren't necessarily up to selection for London but will probably be right up there for Rio ...
Revised:  Like, we've got girls that weren't necessarily up to selection for London but will probably be right up there for ...
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Original:  Our squad will , open, come January, for the first training camp.
Revised:  Our squad will open, come January, for the first training camp.
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Original:  That will be what they're next training to.
Revised:  So that will be what they're next training to.
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Original:  How many tournaments do they usually play each year?
Revised:  How many tournaments do they normally play each year?
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Original:  And you often play more in a Paralympic year, because you're looking to se the competition, and the other teams, and those sorts of things, so...
Revised:  And you often play more in a Paralympic year, because you're looking to see the competition, and the other teams, and those sorts of things, so...
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Original:  This year we did Osaka, which Canada went to, China went to...
Revised:  This year we did Osaka, which Canada went to, went to...
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Original:  Japan and us.
Revised:  , and us.
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Original:  We then went to – and we'd previously just been to Korea last November for qualification.
Revised:  We then went to — and we'd previously just been to Korea last November for qualification.
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Original:  We've been to Manchester . So we've had a few tournaments where we've travelled.
Revised:  We've been to . So we've had a few tournaments where we've travelled.
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Original:  Amanda Carter: Yes. A four nation, no five nations.
Revised:  Amanda Carter: Yes. Of four nations — five nations.
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Original:  Because Canada stayed on  to train in the Netherlands.
Revised:  Because Canada stayed on and continued to train in the Netherlands.
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Original:  Then flew back in to and then in to Cardiff to train for the last six days leading in to London.
Revised:  And then flew back in to and then in to Cardiff to train for the last six days leading in to London.
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Original:  You began playing  in 1991.
Revised:  You began playing basketball in 1991.
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Original: A survey  conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “unease and concern among health professionals that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives”.
Revised: A survey , conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “unease and concern among health professionals that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives”.
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Original:  The survey  revealed that staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate  The Association is concerned that the financial deficits of many NHS trusts may prejudice good infection control practice .
Revised:  The survey pubished today, revealed that staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate The Association is concerned that the financial deficits of many NHS trusts may prejudice good infection control practice .
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Original:     The Telegraph reports that experts consider that Clostridium difficile is an even greater threat to patient’s health than MRSA  
Revised:  The Telegraph reports that experts consider that Clostridium difficile is an even greater threat to patient’s health than MRSA . 
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Original:  The survey pubished today, revealed that  staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
Revised:  The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
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Original: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals  that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
Revised: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed " unease and concern among health professionals that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
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Original: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals  that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
Revised: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals " that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
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Original: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals  that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
Revised: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals that infection control practices in the United Kingdom's National Health Service are " endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
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Original: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals  that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
Revised: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives " . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
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Original: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals  that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
Revised: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey published today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
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Original: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals  that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassurring patients.
Revised: A survey, conducted by the Patients’ Association, an independent charity devoted to defending the interests of patients, has revealed “ unease and concern among health professionals that infection control practices in the NHS are endangering patients’ lives ” . The survey pubished today, revealed that NHS infection control staff felt that infection control was inadequately financed, that training was inadequate and that much time has to be spent reassuring patients.
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Original:  The Association is concerned that the financial deficits of many NHS trusts may prejudice good infection control practice because the resources allocated for this are not effectvely ring-fenceed .
Revised:  The Association is concerned that the financial deficits of many NHS trusts may prejudice good infection control practice because the resources allocated for this are not effectively ring-fenced .
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Original:  There was evidence of inadedquate training and execution of good practice.
Revised:  There was evidence of inadequate training and execution of good practice.
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Original:  BBC reported that a recent paper to a Society for General Microbiology conference, by a University of Leeds team has shown that two chemical cleaners commonly used in hospitals  far from reducing the prevalence of C. diff. actually increased its ability to survive.
Revised:  BBC reported that a recent paper to a Society for General Microbiology conference, by a University of Leeds team has shown that two chemical cleaners commonly used in hospitals , far from reducing the prevalence of C. diff. actually increased its ability to survive.
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Original:  BBC reported that a recent paper to a Society for General Microbiology conference, by a University of Leeds team has shown that two chemical cleaners commonly used in hospitals  far from reducing the prevalence of C. diff. actually increased its ability to survive.
Revised:  BBC reported that a recent paper to a Society for General Microbiology conference, by a University of Leeds team has shown that two chemical cleaners commonly used in hospitals far from reducing the prevalence of Clostridium difficile (C. difficile) bacterium, actually increased its ability to survive.
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Original:  There is particular concern in the Patients' Association about the absence of adequate data on the spread of Clostridium difficile (C. diff) .
Revised:  There is particular concern in the Patients' Association about the absence of adequate data on the spread of C .
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Original:   The Telegraph quotes Katharine Murphy, of the Patients' Association |Patients' Association , as saying: "Collection of data about this very dangerous infection is haphazard to say the least, and we are not getting the true picture.
Revised:  The Telegraph quotes Katharine Murphy, of the Patients' Association , as saying: "Collection of data about this very dangerous infection is haphazard to say the least, and we are not getting the true picture.
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Original:  How can patients have confidence in their hospitals if the real threat posed by C. diff is being played down?"
Revised:  How can patients have confidence in their hospitals if the real threat posed by C. difficile is being played down?"
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Original:  The Report found that only a fifth of respondents confirmed the collection of surgical site (infection) data and that only 27\% reported infection data about Clostridium difficile;
Revised:  The Report found that only a fifth of respondents confirmed the collection of surgical site (infection) data and that only 27\% reported infection data about C. difficile;
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Original:  Trusts are also required to report the incidence of surgical site infectoin , but the Patients' Association survey found that only a fifth of respondents confirmed the collection of these data.
Revised:  Trusts are also required to report the incidence of surgical site infection , but the Patients' Association survey found that only a fifth of respondents confirmed the collection of these data.
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Original:  The Telegraph reports that experts consider that Clostridium difficile is an even greater threat to patient’s health than MRSA. Leicester NHS Trust has reported 49 deaths associated with C. diff . in three of its hospitals.
Revised:  The Telegraph reports that experts consider that C. difficile is an even greater threat to patient’s health than MRSA. Leicester NHS Trust has reported 49 deaths associated with C. diff . in three of its hospitals.
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Original:  The Telegraph reports that experts consider that Clostridium difficile is an even greater threat to patient’s health than MRSA. Leicester NHS Trust has reported 49 deaths associated with C. diff . in three of its hospitals.
Revised:  The Telegraph reports that experts consider that Clostridium difficile is an even greater threat to patient’s health than MRSA. Leicester NHS Trust has reported 49 deaths associated with C. difficile . in three of its hospitals.
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Original: BBC reported that a recent paper to a Society for General Microbiology conference , by a University of Leeds team has shown that two chemical cleaners commonly used in hospitals, far from reducing the prevalence of Clostridium difficile (C. difficile) bacterium, actually increased its ability to survive.
Revised: BBC reported that a recent paper to a Society for General Microbiology conference by a University of Leeds team has shown that two chemical cleaners commonly used in hospitals, far from reducing the prevalence of Clostridium difficile (C. difficile) bacterium, actually increased its ability to survive.
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Original:  There said to be shortcomings in way supplies were acquired and delays in getting supplies of the preferred disinfectant: 2\% Chlorhexidine-based solution.
Revised:  The report also listed shortcomings in way supplies were acquired and delays in getting supplies of the preferred disinfectant: 2\% Chlorhexidine-based solution.
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Original: The Report found that only a fifth of respondents confirmed the collection of surgical site (infection ) data and that only 27\% reported infection data about C. difficile;
Revised: The Report found that only a fifth of respondents confirmed the collection of surgical-site infection data and that only 27\% reported infection data about C. difficile;
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Original:  Trusts are also required to report the incidence of surgical site infection, but the Patients' Association survey found that only a fifth of respondents confirmed the collection of these data.
Revised:  Trusts are also required to report the incidence of surgical-site infection, but the Patients' Association survey found that only a fifth of respondents confirmed the collection of these data.
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Original:  The Telegraph reports that experts consider that C. difficile is an even greater threat to patient ’ s health than MRSA.
Revised:  The Telegraph reports that experts consider that C. difficile is an even greater threat to patient ' s health than MRSA.
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Original:  The report also listed shortcomings in way supplies were acquired and delays in getting supplies of the preferred disinfectant: 2\% Chlorhexidine-based solution.
Revised:  The report also listed shortcomings in way supplies were acquired and delays in getting supplies of the preferred disinfectant: 2\% -based solution.
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Original:  The Telegraph reports that experts consider that C. difficile is an even greater threat to patient's health than MRSA .
Revised:  The Telegraph reports that experts consider that C. difficile is an even greater threat to patient's health than .
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