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Original:  The Canadian The Chronicle-Herald newspaper carried a front page editorial on 27th April titled ' Lower flag as sign of respect ' which argued that the flag should be lowered ' out of respect for those killed in action ' . The newspaper said they would lower to half mast the flags on their building until the funeral services of those that died had passed , and urged readers to do the same.
Revised:  The Canadian The Chronicle-Herald newspaper carried a front page editorial on 27th April titled ' Lower flag as sign of respect " which argued that the flag should be lowered ' out of respect for those killed in action ' . The newspaper said they would lower to half mast the flags on their building until the funeral services of those that died had passed , and urged readers to do the same.
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Original:  The Canadian The Chronicle-Herald newspaper carried a front page editorial on 27th April titled ' Lower flag as sign of respect ' which argued that the flag should be lowered ' out of respect for those killed in action ' . The newspaper said they would lower to half mast the flags on their building until the funeral services of those that died had passed , and urged readers to do the same.
Revised:  The Canadian The Chronicle-Herald newspaper carried a front page editorial on 27th April titled ' Lower flag as sign of respect ' which argued that the flag should be lowered " out of respect for those killed in action ' . The newspaper said they would lower to half mast the flags on their building until the funeral services of those that died had passed , and urged readers to do the same.
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Original:  The Canadian The Chronicle-Herald newspaper carried a front page editorial on 27th April titled ' Lower flag as sign of respect ' which argued that the flag should be lowered ' out of respect for those killed in action ' . The newspaper said they would lower to half mast the flags on their building until the funeral services of those that died had passed , and urged readers to do the same.
Revised:  The Canadian The Chronicle-Herald newspaper carried a front page editorial on 27th April titled ' Lower flag as sign of respect ' which argued that the flag should be lowered ' out of respect for those killed in action . The newspaper said they would lower to half mast the flags on their building until the funeral services of those that died had passed , and urged readers to do the same.
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Original:  The Canadian The Chronicle-Herald newspaper carried a front page editorial on 27th April titled ' Lower flag as sign of respect ' which argued that the flag should be lowered ' out of respect for those killed in action ' . The newspaper said they would lower to half mast the flags on their building until the funeral services of those that died had passed , and urged readers to do the same.
Revised:  The Canadian The Chronicle-Herald newspaper carried a front page editorial on 27th April titled ' Lower flag as sign of respect ' which argued that the flag should be lowered ' out of respect for those killed in action ' . The newspaper pledged to fly their own flag at half-mast whenever a Canadian soldier died in combat , and urged readers to do the same.
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Original:  In the letters page the next day, two readers criticised the front page editorial, whilst others spoke in favour of the newspaper's campaign
Revised:  In the Opinions page the next day, two readers criticised the front page editorial, whilst others spoke in favour of the newspaper's campaign
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Original:  In the letters page the next day, two readers criticised the front page editorial, whilst others spoke in favour of the newspaper's campaign
Revised:  In the letters page the next day, two readers criticised the front page editorial, while dedicating the rest of the page to letters that spoke in favour of the newspaper's campaign
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Original:  "The United States believes …
Revised:  "The United States believes ...
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Original:  The German Foreign Minister Frank-Walter Steinmeier said, "We expect [Iran] to meet international standards and …
Revised:  The German Foreign Minister Frank-Walter Steinmeier said, "We expect [Iran] to meet international standards and ...
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Original:  The President of Iran, Mahmud Ahmadinejad stated,"[Iran] won't back down one iota".
Revised:  The President of Iran, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad stated,"[Iran] won't back down one iota".
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Original: Map of Iran The Iranian supreme leader, Ayatollah Ali Khamenei warned the United States against any attack on his country saying "The Americans should know that if they launch an assault against Islamic Iran, their interests in every possible part of the world will be harmed."
Revised: Map of Iran The Iranian supreme leader, Ali Khamenei warned the United States against any attack on his country saying "The Americans should know that if they launch an assault against Islamic Iran, their interests in every possible part of the world will be harmed."
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Original: The report finds Capt.
Revised: The report finds Captain
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Original:  The first was that pulling the ring could require intense effort, the second that it was possible to drop the ring between seats  and the third that pilots in cold-weather gear could struggle to grasp it.
Revised:  The first was that pulling the ring could require intense effort, the second that it was possible to drop the ring between seats , and the third that pilots in cold-weather gear could struggle to grasp it.
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Original: The report finds Captain Jeffrey Haney's death was partly down to aircraft design flaws.
Revised: The report finds Captain Jeffrey Haney's death was partly due to aircraft design flaws.
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Original: Pro-Taliban militants in Pakistan's troubled Waziristan province decapitated a cab-driver on suspicions that he was an American informer .
Revised: Pro-Taliban militants in Pakistan's troubled Waziristan province decapitated a cab driver on suspicions that he was an American informer .
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Original: Pro-Taliban militants in Pakistan's troubled Waziristan province decapitated a cab-driver on suspicions that he was an American informer .
Revised: Pro-Taliban militants in Pakistan's troubled Waziristan province decapitated a cab-driver on suspicions that he was an American informant .
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Original:  This is the fourth such killing in the region , this month.
Revised:  This is the fourth such killing in the region this month.
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Original:  The deceased was found on Tuesday in a town 25 kilometres south of Wana-in an area where US forces are hunting Al-Qaeda militants.
Revised:  The deceased was found on Tuesday in a town 25 kilometres south of Wana in an area where US forces are hunting Al-Qaeda militants.
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Original:  Two weeks ago, another decapitated body was found with a note saying the victim was an American spy and that other US-sympathizers could expect to meet the same fate.
Revised:  Two weeks ago, another decapitated body was found with a note saying the victim was an American spy and that other US sympathizers could expect to meet the same fate.
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Original: Pro-Taliban militants in Pakistan's troubled Waziristan province decapitated a cab driver on suspicions that he was an American informant.
Revised: Pro-Taliban militants in Pakistan's troubled province decapitated a cab driver on suspicions that he was an American informant.
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Original:  The deceased was found on Tuesday in a town 25 kilometres south of Wana in an area where US forces are hunting Al-Qaeda militants.
Revised:  The deceased was found on Tuesday in a town 25 south of in an area where US forces are hunting Al-Qaeda militants.
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Original:  The deceased was found on Tuesday in a town 25 kilometres south of Wana in an area where US forces are hunting Al-Qaeda militants.
Revised:  The deceased was found on Tuesday in a town 25 kilometres south of Wana in an area where US forces are hunting militants.
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Original:  Waziristan, like Baluchistan , is engaged in a small-scale civil conflict with the Pakistani military
Revised:  Waziristan, like , is engaged in a small-scale civil conflict with the Pakistani military
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Original: , — Australian Capital Territory (ACT) U15 representative Kahu Kapea is gearing up for the International Youth Cup tomorrow in Sydney where she will play in an international match against a Japanese U15 side.
Revised: , — (ACT) U15 representative Kahu Kapea is gearing up for the International Youth Cup tomorrow in Sydney where she will play in an international match against a Japanese U15 side.
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Original: , — Australian Capital Territory (ACT) U15 representative Kahu Kapea is gearing up for the International Youth Cup tomorrow in Sydney where she will play in an international match against a Japanese U15 side.
Revised: , — Australian Capital Territory (ACT) U15 representative Kahu Kapea is gearing up for the International Youth Cup tomorrow in Sydney where she will play in an international match against a U15 side.
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Original:  Wikinews caught up with her between a double header at the Hawker International Softball Centre where played . Kahu Kapea at the Australian test match in Canberra She was not aware that softball had been played had the Olympics until recently and has no particular desire to play in the Games, though she has ambitions to make the national team.
Revised:  Wikinews caught up with her between a double header at the Hawker International Softball Centre where played . Kahu Kapea at the Australian test match in Canberra She was not aware that softball had been played at the until recently and has no particular desire to play in the Games, though she has ambitions to make the national team.
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Original:  Kapea's preference is for Australia but she is half Australian and half New Zealand so she could play for either team and her father would not mind seeing her representing the Kiwis.
Revised:  Kapea's preference is for but she is half Australian and half New Zealand so she could play for either team and her father would not mind seeing her representing the Kiwis.
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Original:  Kapea's preference is for Australia but she is half Australian and half New Zealand so she could play for either team and her father would not mind seeing her representing the Kiwis.
Revised:  Kapea's preference is for Australia but she is half Australian and half so she could play for either team and her father would not mind seeing her representing the Kiwis.
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Original:  The Sydney born Kapea plays softball, soccer  and does dance, but she sees softball as her future.
Revised:  The Sydney born Kapea plays softball, soccer , and does dance, but she sees softball as her future.
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Original:  It is the sport she excels the most at, both her parents played the game  and many family friends are involved with the sport.
Revised:  It is the sport she excels the most at, both her parents played the game , and many family friends are involved with the sport.
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Original:  Kapea, the youngest and tallest member of the current ACT Gold side, has represented the ACT and local clubs in competitions that  given her opportunities to travel to Sydney and Melbourne .
Revised:  Kapea, the youngest and tallest member of the current ACT Gold side, has represented the ACT and local clubs in competitions that have given her opportunities to travel to Sydney and Melbourne .
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Original:  Kapea, the youngest and tallest member of the current ACT Gold side, has represented the ACT and local clubs in competitions that  given her opportunities to travel to Sydney and Melbourne .
Revised:  Kapea, the youngest and tallest member of the current ACT Gold side, has represented the ACT and local clubs in competitions that given her opportunities to travel to and .
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Original:  At the School Sport Australia National Championship last year in Melbourne against New south Wales and Victorian sides, her side went undefeated in the opening round before losing a few games to finish second overall.
Revised:  At the School Sport Australia National Championship last year in Melbourne against and sides, her side went undefeated in the opening round before losing a few games to finish second overall.
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Original:  She also competed in a Sydney based tournament last year.
Revised:  She also competed in a Sydney-based tournament last year.
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Original:  When asked if she faced any discrimination because she is half Maori and softball is traditionally a game for white girls, she said no.
Revised:  When asked if she faced any discrimination because she is half and softball is traditionally a game for white girls, she said no.
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Original: , — (ACT) U15 representative Kahu Kapea is gearing up for the International Youth Cup tomorrow in Sydney where she will play in an international match against a U15 side.
Revised: , — (ACT) U15 representative Kahu Kapea is gearing up for the International Youth Cup tomorrow in Sydney where she is to play in an international match against a U15 side.
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Original:  Kapea's preference is for  but she is half Australian and half  so she could play for either team and her father would not mind seeing her representing the Kiwis.
Revised:  Kapea's preference is for Australia but she is half Australian and half so she could play for either team and her father would not mind seeing her representing the Kiwis.
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Original:  Flight Lieutenant Paul Pardoel was serving in Iraq as a Navigator in 47 Squadron Lyneham of the British Royal Airforce .
Revised:  Flight Lieutenant Paul Pardoel was serving in Iraq as a Navigator in 47 Squadron Lyneham of the British Royal Air Force .
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Original: The mother of the first Australian soldier to be killed in Iraq since the commencement of hostilities  has expressed anger over the death of her only son .  "I think it's just cold-blooded murder.
Revised: The mother of the first Australian soldier to be killed in Iraq since the commencement of hostilities , has expressed anger over the death of her only son . "I think it's just cold-blooded murder.
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Original:    Flight Lieutenant Paul Pardoel , 35, was killed when a British Hercules went down north of Baghdad.
Revised:  "I don't think this should have gone on ... He said to me one night he phoned, he said, 'Mum there's nowhere to hide here, it's just so dangerous, there's nowhere to hide'." Flight Lieutenant Paul Pardoel , 35, was killed when a British Hercules went down north of Baghdad.
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Original:  His mother, Margaret Pardoel, says that she was opposed to the Iraq war.
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Original:  "I don't think this should have gone on ," she said.
Revised:  "I want his family to know, and his friends to know, that he certainly did not die in vain, that this tragic accident occurred - or this tragedy because it may not have been an accident - but this tragedy occurred on a day when 65 per cent of the people of Iraq went out and voted ," she said.
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Original:  "I don't think this should have gone on ," she said.
Revised:  "I don't think this should have gone on ," 
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Original:  Mr Pardoel is survived by his wife and three children .
Revised:  he said .
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Original: Thirty-five year old Flight Lieutenant Paul Pardoel had been on his last flight  with the British Royal Air Force (RAF), to which he had transferred several years ago from the Royal Australian Air Force (RAAF), to serve as Navigator in 47 Squadron Lyneham RAF.
Revised: Thirty-five year old Flight Lieutenant Paul Pardoel had been on his last flight with the British Royal Air Force (RAF), to which he had transferred several years ago from the Royal Australian Air Force (RAAF), as Navigator in 47 Squadron Lyneham RAF.
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Original:  He had been expecting to return in July to his wife and three children in Australia, where they had recently bought a new house in Canberra .
Revised:  He had been expecting to return in July to his wife and three children in Australia, where they had recently bought a new house in Canberra 
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Original:   Marshall Layt-Maynarf of Auckland pitched for New Zealand in the second game.
Revised:  Auckland's Marshall Layt-Maynarf of Auckland pitched for New Zealand in the second game.
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Original:   Marshall Layt-Maynarf of Auckland pitched for New Zealand in the second game.
Revised:  Marshall Layt-Maynarf pitched for New Zealand in the second game.
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Original:  The Tibet Autonomous Region excludes many areas claimed to be part of 'historic Tibet', and the former government of Tibet, headed by the Dalai Llama , now live in exile in India.
Revised:  The Tibet Autonomous Region excludes many areas claimed to be part of 'historic Tibet', and the former government of Tibet, headed by the Dalai Lama , now live in exile in India.
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Original: thumb Milinkevich has said that he has received "a political sentence".
Revised: thumb Milinkievič has said that he has received "a political sentence".
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Original:  I want the Sudanese government to understand the United States of America is serious about solving this problem 
Revised:  I want the Sudanese government to understand the United States of America is serious about solving this problem .
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Original:  Protesting the ongoing atrocities in the Sudan region, Holocaust survivor Rep.
Revised:  Protesting the ongoing atrocities in the Sudan region, Rep.
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Original:  Tom Lantos, D-Calif founder of Congressional Human Rights Caucus  called for the slaughter in Darfur to end.
Revised:  Tom Lantos, D-Calif founder of Congressional Human Rights Caucus , called for the slaughter in Darfur to end.
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Original:  " " The slaughter of the people of Darfur must end  " Democratic house members Reps.
Revised:  " The slaughter of the people of Darfur must end " Democratic house members Reps.
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Original:  " " The slaughter of the people of Darfur must end  " Democratic house members Reps.
Revised:  " " The slaughter of the people of Darfur must end . " Democratic house members Reps.
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Original:  " " The slaughter of the people of Darfur must end  " Democratic house members Reps.
Revised:  " " The slaughter of the people of Darfur must end " Democratic House members
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Original:  Olver said  "We must hold the Sudanese government accountable for the attacks they have supported on their own citizens in Darfur ". Meanwhile  President Bush met with Darfur advocates this Friday in support of rallies all over the US this weekend against the ongoing genocide in western Sudan.
Revised:  Olver said , "We must hold the Sudanese government accountable for the attacks they have supported on their own citizens in Darfur ". Meanwhile President Bush met with Darfur advocates this Friday in support of rallies all over the US this weekend against the ongoing genocide in western Sudan.
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Original:  Olver said  "We must hold the Sudanese government accountable for the attacks they have supported on their own citizens in Darfur ". Meanwhile  President Bush met with Darfur advocates this Friday in support of rallies all over the US this weekend against the ongoing genocide in western Sudan.
Revised:  Olver said "We must hold the Sudanese government accountable for the attacks they have supported on their own citizens in Darfur ." Meanwhile President Bush met with Darfur advocates this Friday in support of rallies all over the US this weekend against the ongoing genocide in western Sudan.
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Original:  Olver said  "We must hold the Sudanese government accountable for the attacks they have supported on their own citizens in Darfur ". Meanwhile  President Bush met with Darfur advocates this Friday in support of rallies all over the US this weekend against the ongoing genocide in western Sudan.
Revised:  Olver said "We must hold the Sudanese government accountable for the attacks they have supported on their own citizens in Darfur ". Meanwhile , President Bush met with Darfur advocates this Friday in support of rallies all over the US this weekend against the ongoing genocide in western Sudan.
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Original:  Five of the criminals had subsquently reoffended, with crimes involving drugs and violence, and given the averge reoffending rates it was likely that more such cases would come to light.
Revised:  Five of the criminals had subsquently reoffended, with crimes involving drugs and violence, and given the average reoffending rates it was likely that more such cases would come to light.
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Original:  An intense effort is underway by the police and immigration servies to track down 63 of the high-risk released offenders is underway, and more arrests are expected today
Revised:  An intense effort is underway by the police and immigration servies to track down 63 of the higher-risk released offenders is underway, and more arrests are expected today
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Original:  Five of the criminals had subsquently reoffended, with crimes involving drugs and violence, and given the average reoffending rates it was likely that more such cases would come to light.
Revised:  Five of the criminals had subsequently reoffended, with crimes involving drugs and violence, and given the average reoffending rates it was likely that more such cases would come to light.
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Original:  An intense effort is underway by the police and immigration servies to track down 63 of the higher-risk released offenders is underway , and more arrests are expected today
Revised:  An intense effort is under way by the police and immigration servies to track down 63 of the higher-risk released offenders is underway , and more arrests are expected today
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Original:  An intense effort is underway by the police and immigration servies to track down 63 of the higher-risk released offenders is underway , and more arrests are expected today
Revised:  An intense effort is underway by the police and immigration services to track down 63 of the higher-risk released offenders is underway , and more arrests are expected today
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Original:  An intense effort is underway by the police and immigration servies to track down 63 of the higher-risk released offenders is underway , and more arrests are expected today
Revised:  An intense effort is underway by the police and immigration servies to track down 63 of the higher-risk released offenders , and more arrests are expected today
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Original:  Five of the criminals had subsequently reoffended , with crimes involving drugs and violence, and given the average reoffending rates it was likely that more such cases would come to light.
Revised:  Five of the criminals have subsequently re-offended , with crimes involving drugs and violence, and given the average reoffending rates it was likely that more such cases would come to light.
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Original:  Five of the criminals had subsequently reoffended , with crimes involving drugs and violence, and given the average reoffending rates it was likely that more such cases would come to light.
Revised:  Five of the criminals had subsequently reoffended , with crimes involving drugs and violence, and given the average reoffending rates it is likely that more such cases would come to light.
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