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Original:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
Revised:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology and HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
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Original:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
Revised:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
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Original:  The first Blu-Ray and HD DVD products are expected to start appearing for mainstream markets within the next year
Revised:  The first Blu-Ray and HD DVD products are expected to start appearing in mainstream markets within the next year
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Original:  while Blu-Ray's base of support is the Blu-Ray Disc Assosiation , which is lead by Blu-Ray developers Sony and Philips.
Revised:  while Blu-Ray's base of support is the Blu-Ray Disc Association , which is lead by Blu-Ray developers Sony and Philips.
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Original:   HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVDs, and benefits from similarities with current DVDs, such as cheap production and compatibility with current DVD players.
Revised:  120px HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVDs, and benefits from similarities with current DVDs, such as cheap production and compatibility with current DVD players.
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Original:  while Blu-Ray's base of support is the Blu-Ray Disc Association, which is lead by Blu-Ray developers Sony and Philips.
Revised:  while Blu-Ray's base of support is the Blu-Ray Disc Association, which is led by Blu-Ray developers Sony and Philips.
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Original: Denny Hamlin, from the :w: Joe Gibbs Racing |Joe Gibbs Racing team, clinched the fourth position, after leading one laps during the race.
Revised: Denny Hamlin, from the Joe Gibbs Racing |Joe Gibbs Racing team, clinched the fourth position, after leading one laps during the race.
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Original: Denny Hamlin, from the :w: Joe Gibbs Racing |Joe Gibbs Racing team, clinched the fourth position, after leading one laps during the race.
Revised: Denny Hamlin, from the :w: Joe Gibbs Racing team, clinched the fourth position, after leading one laps during the race.
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Original:  Afterward, McMurray became the leader , while Busch couldn't catch him.
Revised:  Afterward, McMurray became the leader . Busch was unable to catch him.
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Original:  Logano, Kevin Harvick, David Reutimann, and David Ragan rounded out the top ten finishers in the race.
Revised: Joey Logano, Kevin Harvick, David Reutimann, and David Ragan rounded out the top ten finishers in the race.
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Original:  Other drivers in the Chase, such as Kurt Busch finished thitieth .
Revised:  Kurt Busch, another driver in the Chase, such as Kurt Busch finished thitieth .
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Original:  Other drivers in the Chase, such as Kurt Busch finished thitieth .
Revised:  Other drivers in the Chase, finished thirtieth .
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Original:  Daisy Yáñez, a 17-years-old teenager from El Huique, near Santa Cruz, Chile has disappeared on Saturday morning.
Revised:  Daisy Yáñez, a 17-year-old from El Huique, near Santa Cruz, Chile has disappeared on Saturday morning.
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Original:  Daisy Yáñez, a 17-years-old teenager from El Huique, near Santa Cruz, Chile has disappeared on Saturday morning.
Revised:  Daisy Yáñez, a 17-years-old teenager from El Huique, near Santa Cruz, Chile disappeared on Saturday morning.
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Original:  Her parents moved to the Cardenal Caro Province capital and filed a complaint for alleged misfortune in the Police.
Revised:  Her parents then went to the Cardenal Caro Province capital and filed a complaint for alleged misfortune in the Police.
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Original:  Her parents moved to the Cardenal Caro Province capital and filed a complaint for alleged misfortune in the Police.
Revised:  Her parents moved to the Cardenal Caro Province capital and filed a complaint for alleged misfortune with the Police.
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Original:  Chilean Army, Pichilemu Police, Seguridad Ciudadana (Public Safety Agency) and Investigations Police of Chile personnel is tracking the Infiernillo and Las Terrazas beach.
Revised:  Chilean Army, Pichilemu Police, Seguridad Ciudadana (Public Safety Agency) and Investigations Police of Chile personnel are tracking the Infiernillo and Las Terrazas beach.
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Original:  We are very distressed," her parent surnamed Yáñez told Wikinews on Saturday night
Revised:  We are very distressed," one of her parents told Wikinews on Saturday night
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Original: Yáñez left a letter to her parents saying that she was "going to end her life in Pichilemu," located more than 80 kilometers from El Huique.
Revised: Yáñez left a letter to her parents saying that she was "going to end her life in Pichilemu," located more than from El Huique.
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Original: The 43-year old Kerstin Lorenz, of the far right w:NPD: , suffered a cerebral apoplexy during a campaign appearance on Monday and slid into a coma.
Revised: The 43-year old Kerstin Lorenz, of the far right NPD , suffered a cerebral apoplexy during a campaign appearance on Monday and slid into a coma.
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Original:  The NPD must now nominate a new candidate for the constuency of Dresden I and elections officals have to reprint hundred thousands ballot papers.
Revised:  The NPD must now nominate a new candidate for the constituency of Dresden I and elections officals have to reprint hundred thousands ballot papers.
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Original:  The leading election officals for the state of Saxonia, Irene Schneider-Böttcher, said it would be impossible to achieve all that within the couple of days till election day on September 18th.
Revised:  The leading election offical for the state of Saxonia, Irene Schneider-Böttcher, said it would be impossible to achieve all that within the couple of days till election day on September 18th.
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Original:  While Dresden I is only one out of 299 constiuencies , it could ultimatley decide who will govern the country for the next few years.
Revised:  While Dresden I is only one out of 299 constituencies , it could ultimatley decide who will govern the country for the next few years.
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Original:  The projected majority of the Opposition parties FDP and CDU, which headed the polls for months, is shrinking with current government parties Greens and SPD, along with the Party of the Left, getting closer by the day
Revised:  The projected majority of the opposition parties FDP and CDU, which headed the polls for months, is shrinking with current government parties Greens and SPD, along with the Party of the Left, getting closer by the day
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Original: The death of a candidate for the Bundestag will delay the final results for the German federal election by several weeks.
Revised: The death of a candidate for the Bundestag could delay the final results for the German federal election by several weeks.
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Original: The death of a candidate for the Bundestag will delay the final results for the German federal election by several weeks.
Revised: The death of a candidate for the Bundestag will delay the final outcome of the German federal election by several weeks.
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Original:  She died on Wednesday in a hospital.
Revised:  She died on Wednesday in hospital.
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Original:  The NPD must now nominate a new candidate for the constituency of Dresden I and elections officals have to reprint hundred thousands of ballot papers.
Revised:  The NPD must now nominate a new candidate for the constituency of Dresden I and election officals have to reprint hundred thousands of ballot papers.
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Original:  The NPD must now nominate a new candidate for the constituency of Dresden I and elections officals have to reprint hundred thousands of ballot papers.
Revised:  The NPD must now nominate a new candidate for the constituency of Dresden I and elections officals have to reprint hundreds of thousands of ballot papers.
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Original:  Also, the vote of everyone who already sent in his absentee ballot will be declared invalid, those voters needs new paper as well.
Revised:  Also, the vote of anyone who already sent in his absentee ballot will be declared invalid, those voters needs new paper as well.
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Original:  Also, the vote of everyone who already sent in his absentee ballot will be declared invalid, those voters needs new paper as well.
Revised:  Also, the vote of everyone who already sent in their absentee ballot will be declared invalid, those voters needs new paper as well.
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Original:  Also, the vote of everyone who already sent in his absentee ballot will be declared invalid, those voters needs new paper as well.
Revised:  Also, the vote of everyone who already sent in his absentee ballot will be declared invalid, and these voters need new ballots as well.
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Original:  The leading election offical for the state of Saxonia, Irene Schneider-Böttcher, said it would be impossible to achieve all that within the couple of days till election dayon September 18th.
Revised:  The leading election offical for the state of Saxonia, Irene Schneider-Böttcher, said it would be impossible to achieve all that was required within the time remaining before election day, September 18th.
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Original:  She ordered a by-election for a yet to be determined date.
Revised:  She ordered a by-election for a yet-to-be-determined date.
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Original:  That by-election will therefore prevent the election officals from declaring the final results on election night, which could leave Germany in deep uncertainty.
Revised:  That by-election result could potentially change the final outcome, which would leave Germany in deep uncertainty.
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Original:  That by-election will therefore prevent the election officals from declaring the final results on election night, which could leave Germany in deep uncertainty.
Revised:  That by-election will therefore prevent the election officals from declaring the final results on election night, which could leave Germany in uncertainty.
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Original:  While Dresden I is only one out of 299 constituencies, it could ultimatley decide who will govern the country for the next few years.
Revised:  While Dresden I is only one out of 299 constituencies, it could ultimately decide who will govern the country for the next few years.
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Original:  thousands of soldiers are on standby, ready to deliver aid to those affected  
Revised:  thousands of soldiers are on standby, ready to deliver aid to those affected . 
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Original: Google announced today, September 8, that they had hired Vinton Cerf, to serve as the Chief Internet Evangelist.
Revised: Google announced today, September 8, that they hired Vinton Cerf, to serve as the Chief Internet Evangelist.
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Original:  While working at the w: US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency  he played an played a important role in the development of Internet.
Revised:  While working at the US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency he played an played a important role in the development of Internet.
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Original:  While working at the w: US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency  he played an played a important role in the development of Internet.
Revised:  While working at the w: US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency (ARPA) he played an played a important role in the development of Internet.
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Original:  While working at the w: US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency  he played an played a important role in the development of Internet.
Revised:  While working at the w: US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency he played an important role in the development of Internet.
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Original:  At ARPA he co-designed the TCP/IP protocol, the protocol on which the Internet runs.
Revised:  At ARPA he co-designed the TCP/IP protocol, on which the Internet runs.
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Original:  Cerf has been awarded the National Medal of Technology , the Premio Principe de Asturias de Investigacion Cientifica.
Revised:  Cerf has been awarded the National Medal of Technology and the Premio Principe de Asturias de Investigacion Cientifica.
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Original:  In early 2005 Cerf was named one of the ACM's 2004 Turing Award winners, one of the most prestigious computing awards.
Revised:  In early 2005 Cerf was included among the ACM's 2004 Turing Award winners, one of the most prestigious computing awards.
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Original:  He is also working on developing a new set of communication protocols planet-to-planet communications  for NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory.
Revised:  He is also working on developing a new set of planet-to-planet communications for NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory.
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Original:  He is also working on developing a new set of communication protocols planet-to-planet communications  for NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory.
Revised:  He is also working on developing a new set of communication protocols planet-to-planet communications protocols for NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory.
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Original:  While working at the US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency ( ARPA ) he played an important role in the development of Internet.
Revised:  While working at the US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency ( DARPA ) he played an important role in the development of Internet.
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Original:  At ARPA he co-designed the TCP/IP protocol, on which the Internet runs.
Revised:  At DARPA he co-designed the TCP/IP protocol, on which the Internet runs.
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Original:  In early 2005 Cerf was included among the ACM's 2004 Turing Award winners, one of the most prestigious computing awards.
Revised:  In early 2005 Cerf was included among the Association for Computing Machinery (ACM) 2004 Turing Award winners, one of the most prestigious computing awards.
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Original: Google announced today, September 8, that they  hired Vinton Cerf, to serve as the Chief Internet Evangelist.
Revised: Google announced today, September 8, that they have hired Vinton Cerf, to serve as the Chief Internet Evangelist.
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Original:  While working at the US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency (DARPA) he played an important role in the development of  Internet.
Revised:  While working at the US Department of Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency (DARPA) he played an important role in the development of the Internet.
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Original:  People magazine listed Cerf as one the "25 Most Intriguing People" in 1994.
Revised:  People Magazine listed Cerf as one the "25 Most Intriguing People" in 1994.
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Original:  In early 2005 Cerf was included among the Association for Computing Machinery (ACM) 2004 Turing Award winners , one of the most prestigious computing awards.
Revised:  In early 2005 Cerf was included among the Association for Computing Machinery (ACM) 2004 Turing Award winners . The Turing Award is considered one of the most prestigious computing awards.
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Original:  He is also working on developing a new set of planet-to-planet communications protocols for NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory.
Revised:  He is currently working on developing a new set of planet-to-planet communications protocols for NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory.
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Original: Over 1,700 women from over 40 nations have marched through Bukavu, Democratic Republic of the Congo  to protest sexual violence against their gender.
Revised: Over 1,700 women from over 40 nations marched through Bukavu, Democratic Republic of the Congo to protest sexual violence against their gender.
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Original: Over 1,700 women from over 40 nations marched through Bukavu, Democratic Republic of the Congo  yesterday, to protest sexual violence against their gender.
Revised: Over 1,700 women from over 40 nations marched through Bukavu, Democratic Republic of the Congo (DRC) yesterday, to protest sexual violence against their gender.
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Original:  One marching activist said "They [the women] have had enough, enough, enough, enough.
Revised:  One local activist said "They [the women] have had enough, enough, enough, enough.
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Original:  Eastern Congo is worse affected, and aid groups have suggested the actual figure may be higher owing to the lack of likelihood of victims coming forward.
Revised:  Eastern Congo is worse affected, and aid groups have suggested the actual figure may be higher as victims are unlikely to come forward.
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Original:  The third "World March of Women" followed days of talks aimed at changing the social accpetance of violence, especially against women, in the Congo.
Revised:  The third "World March of Women" followed days of talks aimed at changing the social acceptance of violence, especially against women, in the Congo.
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Original: The third "World March of Women" followed  days of talks aimed at changing the social acceptance of violence, especially against women, in the Congo.
Revised: The third "World March of Women" followed several days of talks aimed at changing the social acceptance of violence, especially against women, in the Congo.
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Original:  Some men also joined the discussions  
Revised:  Some men also joined the discussions . 
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Original: Over 1,700 women from over 40 nations marched through Bukavu, Democratic Republic of the Congo (DRC) yesterday, to protest sexual violence against their gender.
Revised: Over 1,700 women from more than 40 nations marched through Bukavu, Democratic Republic of the Congo (DRC) yesterday, to protest sexual violence against their gender.
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Original: Crude oil price fell down $0.32 to $ 63.95 a barrel  after a report showing less than expected losses of oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina had been published .
Revised: Crude oil prices fell by $0.32, to $ 63.95 a barrel after a report showing less than expected losses of oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina had been published .
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Original: Crude oil price fell down $0.32 to $ 63.95 a barrel  after a report showing less than expected losses of oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina had been published .
Revised: Crude oil price fell down $0.32 to $ 63.95 a barrel , after a report showing less than expected losses of oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina had been published .
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Original: Crude oil price fell down $0.32 to $ 63.95 a barrel  after a report showing less than expected losses of oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina had been published .
Revised: Crude oil price fell down $0.32 to $ 63.95 a barrel after a report showed less than expected losses of oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina had been published .
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Original: Crude oil price fell down $0.32 to $ 63.95 a barrel  after a report showing less than expected losses of oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina had been published .
Revised: Crude oil price fell down $0.32 to $ 63.95 a barrel after a report showing less than expected losses in oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina had been published .
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Original: Crude oil price fell down $0.32 to $ 63.95 a barrel  after a report showing less than expected losses of oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina had been published .
Revised: Crude oil price fell down $0.32 to $ 63.95 a barrel after a report showing less than expected losses of oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina .
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Original:  According to the United States Department of Energy report , crude oil stocks declined by 6.5 million  to 315 million barrels.
Revised:  According to a report published by the U.S. Department of Energy report , crude oil stocks declined by 6.5 million to 315 million barrels.
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Original:  According to the United States Department of Energy report , crude oil stocks declined by 6.5 million  to 315 million barrels.
Revised:  According to the United States Department of Energy (DOE) , crude oil stocks declined by 6.5 million to 315 million barrels.
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Original:  According to the United States Department of Energy report , crude oil stocks declined by 6.5 million  to 315 million barrels.
Revised:  According to the United States Department of Energy report , crude oil stocks declined by 6.5 million , to 315 million barrels.
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Original:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, but the day after the storm  97\% were offline.
Revised:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, but the day after the storm , 97\% were offline.
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Original:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, but the day after the storm  97\% were offline.
Revised:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, but the day after the storm 97\% of production was offline.
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Original:  DOE said that the production would not go normal until December.
Revised:  The DOE said it expected that production would not go normal until December.
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Original:  DOE said that the production would not go normal until December.
Revised:  DOE said that the production would not return to normal until December.
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Original:  Yesterday, economists warned one of the impacts of Katrina on the US economy would be reducing a number of jobs by  400,000.
Revised:  Yesterday, economists warned one of the impacts of Katrina on the U.S. economy would be reducing a number of jobs by 400,000.
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Original:  Yesterday, economists warned one of the impacts of Katrina on the US economy would be reducing a number of jobs by  400,000.
Revised:  Yesterday, economists warned one of the impacts of Katrina on the US economy would be a reduction in numbers of jobs by 400,000.
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