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Original:  As a result, Chinese diplomats have been instructed to veto the initial document, which advocates much stronger sanctions against North Korea than semi-allies Russia and China would have felt comfortable with.
Revised:  As a result, Chinese diplomats have been instructed to veto the initial document, which advocates much stronger sanctions against North Korea than neighbours Russia and China would have felt comfortable with.
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Original:  After reviewing a draft copy - which was released to The Associated Press - several influential nations, including the United States and the United Kingdom, have reaffirmed their support for Japan's initial version.
Revised:  After reviewing a draft copy - which was released to the Associated Press - several influential nations, including the United States and the United Kingdom, have reaffirmed their support for Japan's initial version.
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Original: The flag of North Korea Kim Jong Il with Madeleine Albright in 2000.
Revised: The flag of North Korea Kim Jong Il with Madeleine Albright in 2000
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Original: The flag of North Korea Kim Jong Il with Madeleine Albright in 2000 China and Russia have today put forward a jointly-crafted resolution regarding sanctions against North Korea.
Revised: The flag of North Korea China and Russia have today put forward a jointly-crafted resolution regarding sanctions against North Korea.
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Original: February 14, Wikinews: 2005 Three US government sources have reported the existence of US military drone flights made over Iran, carrying surveillance equipment and particle filters capable of detecting nuclear materials.
Revised: February 14, 2005 Three US government sources have reported the existence of US military drone flights made over Iran, carrying surveillance equipment and particle filters capable of detecting nuclear materials.
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Original: February 14, Wikinews: 2005 Three US government sources have reported the existence of US military drone flights made over Iran, carrying surveillance equipment and particle filters capable of detecting nuclear materials.
Revised: February 14, Wikinews: 2005 Three U.S.-government sources have reported the existence of US military drone flights made over Iran, carrying surveillance equipment and particle filters capable of detecting nuclear materials.
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Original: February 14, Wikinews: 2005 Three US government sources have reported the existence of US military drone flights made over Iran, carrying surveillance equipment and particle filters capable of detecting nuclear materials.
Revised: February 14, Wikinews: 2005 Three US government sources have reported the existence of U.S. military drone flights made over Iran, carrying surveillance equipment and particle filters capable of detecting nuclear materials.
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Original:  Confusingly, US military sources denied the overflights.
Revised:  Confusingly, U.S.-military sources denied the overflights.
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Original:  They viewed them as provocative , and probably designed to trick the Iranians into turning on their radar so that the US could determine potential targets.
Revised:  They viewed them as provocative and probably designed to trick the Iranians into turning on their radar so that the US could determine potential targets.
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Original:  As Iran does not have political ties with the US, it has formally issued its objections to the flights through Swiss diplomats
Revised:  Because Iran does not have political ties with the US, it has formally issued its objections to the flights through Swiss diplomats
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Original: Iranian military personel said they were aware of them, and sightings had prompted a number of UFO reports in the area of Iranian nuclear installations.
Revised: Iranian military personnel said they were aware of them, and sightings had prompted a number of UFO reports in the area of Iranian nuclear installations.
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Original:  Australia will now go on to play in the semi finals   .
Revised:  Australia will now go on to play in the semi finals . .
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Original: (1) Victoria Brown and (4) Holly Lincoln-Smith during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=women in swimsuits|left In yesterday 's quarter final match of the FINA Women's World League Super Finals , easily beat by a score of 18-0 . Australia will now go on to play in the semi finals.
Revised: (1) Victoria Brown and (4) Holly Lincoln-Smith during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=women in swimsuits|left Yesterday 's quarter final match of the FINA Women's World League Super Finals , easily beat by a score of 18-0 . Australia will now go on to play in the semi finals.
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Original: (1) Victoria Brown and (4) Holly Lincoln-Smith during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=women in swimsuits|left In yesterday 's quarter final match of the FINA Women's World League Super Finals , easily beat by a score of 18-0 . Australia will now go on to play in the semi finals.
Revised: (1) Victoria Brown and (4) Holly Lincoln-Smith during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=women in swimsuits|left In yesterday 's quarter final match of the FINA Women's World League Super Finals saw the easily beat by a score of 18-0 . Australia will now go on to play in the semi finals.
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Original: (1) Victoria Brown and (4) Holly Lincoln-Smith during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=women in swimsuits|left In yesterday 's quarter final match of the FINA Women's World League Super Finals , easily beat by a score of 18-0 . Australia will now go on to play in the semi finals.
Revised: (1) Victoria Brown and (4) Holly Lincoln-Smith during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=women in swimsuits|left In yesterday 's quarter final match of the FINA Women's World League Super Finals , easily beat by 18 to nil . Australia will now go on to play in the semi finals.
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Original:  Mubarak, who has been hospitalized in Egypt's since the start of his trial due to bad health,  is the first leader to be prosecuted since the commencement of the over a year ago.
Revised:  He has been hospitalized in Egypt's since the start of his trial due to bad health, is the first leader to be prosecuted since the commencement of the over a year ago.
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Original:  Mubarak, who has been hospitalized in Egypt's since the start of his trial due to bad health,  is the first leader to be prosecuted since the commencement of the over a year ago.
Revised:  Mubarak, who has been hospitalized in Egypt's since the start of his trial due to bad health, and is the first leader to be prosecuted since the commencement of the over a year ago.
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Original:  Four highly placed government workers from the interior ministry in charge of security -- including former Deputy Interior Minister Hassan Abd El Rahman -- and two regional security directors were also cleared of any wrongdoing.
Revised:  Four highly placed government workers from the interior ministry in charge of security — including former Deputy Interior Minister Hassan Abd El Rahman -- and two regional security directors were also cleared of any wrongdoing.
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Original:  Four highly placed government workers from the interior ministry in charge of security -- including former Deputy Interior Minister Hassan Abd El Rahman -- and two regional security directors were also cleared of any wrongdoing.
Revised:  Four highly placed government workers from the interior ministry in charge of security -- including former Deputy Interior Minister Hassan Abd El Rahman — and two regional security directors were also cleared of any wrongdoing.
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Original:  Protests occurred throughout the country in 's  , and .
Revised:  Protests occurred throughout the country in 's , , and .
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Original: The people of Egypt both celebrated the convictions and protested the court's decision to acquit others.
Revised: People in Egypt both celebrated the convictions and protested the court's decision to acquit others.
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Original: While Mubarak was transferred to the Tora prison hospital, independent lawyers said they expected an appeal, which would extend the trial.
Revised: While Mubarak was transferred to the Tora prison hospital, independent lawyers said they expect an appeal, which would extend the trial.
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Original:  The trial went on for ten months before the verdict.
Revised:  The trial has already gone on for ten months before the verdict.
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Original:  He has been hospitalized in Egypt's since the start of his trial due to bad health , and is the first leader to be prosecuted since the commencement of the over a year ago  .
Revised:  He has been hospitalized in Egypt's since the start of his trial due to bad health ; and is the first leader to be prosecuted since the commencement of the over a year ago .
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Original:  He has been hospitalized in Egypt's since the start of his trial due to bad health , and is the first leader to be prosecuted since the commencement of the over a year ago  .
Revised:  He has been hospitalized in Egypt's since the start of his trial due to bad health , and is the first leader , since the began over a year ago .
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Original:  Mubarak resigned from his presidential position  as a result of the widespread protests in February 2011.
Revised:  Mubarak resigned from his presidential position in February 2011 as a result of the widespread protests in February 2011.
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Original:  Mubarak resigned from his presidential position  as a result of the widespread protests in February 2011.
Revised:  Mubarak resigned from his presidential position as a result of the widespread protests .
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Original:  Four highly placed government workers from the interior ministry in charge of security — including former Deputy Interior Minister Hassan Abd El Rahman — and two regional security directors were also cleared of any wrongdoing.
Revised:  Four highly-placed government workers from the interior ministry in charge of security — including former Deputy Interior Minister Hassan Abd El Rahman — and two regional security directors were also cleared of any wrongdoing.
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Original:  Four highly placed government workers from the interior ministry in charge of security — including former Deputy Interior Minister Hassan Abd El Rahman — and two regional security directors were also cleared of any wrongdoing.
Revised:  Four highly placed government workers from the interior ministry in charge of security — including former Deputy Interior Minister Hassan Abd El Rahman — and two regional security directors were cleared of any wrongdoing.
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Original:  People in Egypt both celebrated the convictions and protested the court's decision to acquit others.
Revised:  People in Egypt both celebrated the convictions and protested the acquittals others.
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Original:  This enables the users of the two software services to communicate with each other using their already established and preferred software client, Microsoft's Windows Live Messenger (formerly MSN Messenger) and Yahoo!
Revised:  This enables users of the two software services to communicate with each other using their already established and preferred software client, Microsoft's Windows Live Messenger (formerly MSN Messenger) and Yahoo!
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Original:  The   program is availaible internationally in more than 15 markets  
Revised:  The The program is availaible internationally in more than 15 markets 
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Original:  The   program is availaible internationally in more than 15 markets  
Revised:  The program is availaible internationally in more than 15 markets . 
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Original: Nine months after announcing the interoperability between their instant messaging (IM) services, internet rivals Microsoft and Yahoo! began limited public beta(pre-release) testing of the program.
Revised: Nine months after announcing the interoperability between their instant messaging (IM) services, rival Internet portals MSN and Yahoo! began limited public beta(pre-release) testing of the program.
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Original:  This enables users of the two software services to communicate with each other using their already established and preferred software client, Microsoft's Windows Live Messenger (formerly MSN Messenger) and Yahoo!
Revised:  This enables users of the two services to communicate with each other using their already established and preferred software client, Microsoft's Windows Live Messenger (formerly MSN Messenger) and Yahoo!
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Original:  This enables users of the two software services to communicate with each other using their already established and preferred software client, Microsoft's Windows Live Messenger (formerly MSN Messenger) and Yahoo!
Revised:  This enables users of the two software services to communicate with each other using their existing IM client, Microsoft's Windows Live Messenger (formerly MSN Messenger) and Yahoo!
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Original:  Users wishing to use the new feature can go to a special page on the client 's website, where they have to review and accept an agreement.
Revised:  Users wishing to use the new feature can go to a special page on the service 's website, where they have to review and accept an agreement.
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Original:  After signing out and in again to the service, without downloading any new software, the interoperability is meant to be working .
Revised:  After signing out and signing in again, the interoperability is enabled without downloading any new software, the interoperability is meant to be working .
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Original:  After signing out and in again to the service, without downloading any new software, the interoperability is meant to be working .
Revised:  After signing out and in again to the service, without downloading any new software, .
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Original:  The users are supposed to be able to see each others' online presence, view personal status messages, share select emoticons, view offline messages and add new contacts from either service.
Revised:  The service is designed to allow users to see each others' online presence, view personal status messages, share select emoticons, view offline messages and add new contacts from either service.
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Original: Nine months after announcing the interoperability between their instant messaging (IM) services, rival Internet portals MSN and Yahoo! began limited public beta (pre-release) testing of the program.
Revised: Nine months after announcing the interoperability between their instant messaging (IM) services, Internet rivals Microsoft and Yahoo! began limited public beta (pre-release) testing of the program.
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Original: Fifa has begun disciplinary proceedings against Marco Materazzi after Zinedine Zidane was sent off for headbutting Materazzi in the chest.
Revised: FIFA has begun disciplinary proceedings against Marco Materazzi after Zinedine Zidane was sent off for headbutting Materazzi in the chest.
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Original:  Fifa has summoned both players to attend a hearing of its disciplinary committee on Thursday 20 July and a decision is expected later that day.
Revised:  Both players have been summoned to attend a hearing of its disciplinary committee on Thursday 20 July and a decision is expected later that day.
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Original:  Fifa have said: "The decision was taken following claims made by Zinedine Zidane, who attacked Materazzi with a headbutt during the final."
Revised:  FIFA said: "The decision was taken following claims made by Zinedine Zidane, who attacked Materazzi with a headbutt during the final."
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Original:  One of the injured was transported by air ambulance to Halifax for futher treatment.
Revised:  One of the injured was transported by air ambulance to Halifax for further treatment.
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Original:  The aircraft were previously grounded due to cracks in critical rotor components which were believed to be the cause of the crash of a British Merlin (EH101) in 2000 
Revised:  The aircraft were previously grounded due to cracks in critical rotor components which were believed to be the cause of the crash of a British Merlin (EH101) in 2000. 
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Original:  The aircraft was conducting a hoist operation at 12: 30AM local time near a Canadian Coast Guard Vessel.
Revised:  The aircraft was conducting a hoist operation at 12: 30 AM local time near a Canadian Coast Guard Vessel.
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Original:  Three crew were killed in the incident .
Revised:  Killed in the incident .
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Original:  Police have confirmed that three people have been injured  including one child.
Revised:  Police have confirmed that three people have been injured , including one child.
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Original:  Northen Constabulary have stated "It's understood that two gondolas would appeared to have collided and a number of casualties have been reported.
Revised:  Northern Constabulary have stated "It's understood that two gondolas would appeared to have collided and a number of casualties have been reported.
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Original:  The local mountain rescue team, Inverness helimed and other air support are in attendance to remove casualties"  
Revised:  The local mountain rescue team, Inverness helimed and other air support are in attendance to remove casualties" . 
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Original: Melissa Rippon of Australia during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=woman swimming in pool|left Overnight in China, beat 8-7 in the FINA Women's World League Super Finals semi finals to qualify for the gold medal match later tonight against the who beat 7-6 in their own qualifying match.
Revised: Melissa Rippon of Australia during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=woman swimming in pool|left Overnight in China, beat 8–7 in the FINA Women's World League Super Finals semi finals to qualify for the gold medal match later tonight against the who beat 7-6 in their own qualifying match.
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Original: Melissa Rippon of Australia during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=woman swimming in pool|left Overnight in China, beat 8-7 in the FINA Women's World League Super Finals semi finals to qualify for the gold medal match later tonight against the who beat 7-6 in their own qualifying match.
Revised: Melissa Rippon of Australia during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=woman swimming in pool|left Overnight in China, beat 8-7 in the FINA Women's World League Super Finals semi finals to qualify for the gold medal match later tonight against the who beat 7–6 in their own qualifying match.
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Original:  Australia trailed the Chinese 0-2 at the end of the first quarter before coming back to win.
Revised:  Australia trailed the Chinese 0–2 at the end of the first quarter before coming back to win.
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Original:  They were down 0-4 at one point before battling back for the win.
Revised:  They were down 0–4 at one point before battling back for the win.
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Original:  In other matches played yesterday, beat 15-13 in an overtime penalty shootout to qualify for the fifth place match in their inaugural appearance in the competition, while beat 17-4.
Revised:  In other matches played yesterday, beat 15–13 in an overtime penalty shootout to qualify for the fifth place match in their inaugural appearance in the competition, while beat 17-4.
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Original:  In other matches played yesterday, beat 15-13 in an overtime penalty shootout to qualify for the fifth place match in their inaugural appearance in the competition, while beat 17-4.
Revised:  In other matches played yesterday, beat 15-13 in an overtime penalty shootout to qualify for the fifth place match in their inaugural appearance in the competition, while beat 17–4.
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Original: Melissa Rippon of Australia during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=woman swimming in pool|left Overnight in China, beat 8–7 in the FINA Women's World League Super Finals semi finals to qualify for the gold medal match later tonight against the who beat  7–6 in their own qualifying match.
Revised: Melissa Rippon of Australia during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=woman swimming in pool|left Overnight in China, the beat the 8–7 in the FINA Women's World League Super Finals semi finals to qualify for the gold medal match later tonight against the who beat 7–6 in their own qualifying match.
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Original: Melissa Rippon of Australia during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=woman swimming in pool|left Overnight in China, beat 8–7 in the FINA Women's World League Super Finals semi finals to qualify for the gold medal match later tonight against the who beat  7–6 in their own qualifying match.
Revised: Melissa Rippon of Australia during a test match earlier this year between Great Britain and Australia in Canberra |alt=woman swimming in pool|left Overnight in China, beat 8–7 in the FINA Women's World League Super Finals semi finals to qualify for the gold medal match later tonight against the who beat the 7–6 in their own qualifying match.
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Original:  The gold medal game will be played at 19:00 local time in Changshu, China immediately following the bronze medal match between China and Greece being played at 17:40 local time.
Revised:  The gold medal game is to be played at 19:00 local time in Changshu, China immediately following the bronze medal match between China and Greece being played at 17:40 local time.
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Original:  In other matches played yesterday, beat 15–13 in an overtime penalty shootout to qualify for the fifth place match in their inaugural appearance in the competition, while beat 17–4.
Revised:  In other matches played yesterday, the beat the 15–13 in an overtime penalty shootout to qualify for the fifth place match in their inaugural appearance in the competition, while beat 17–4.
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Original:  In other matches played yesterday, beat 15–13 in an overtime penalty shootout to qualify for the fifth place match in their inaugural appearance in the competition, while beat 17–4.
Revised:  In other matches played yesterday, beat 15–13 in an overtime penalty shootout to qualify for the fifth place match in their inaugural appearance in the competition, while the beat the 17–4.
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Original:  The fifth place match between Germany and Russia will be played at 16:20 local time, while the seventh place match between Canada and Italy will kick off the final round at 15:00 local time.
Revised:  The fifth place match between Germany and Russia is to be played at 16:20 local time, while the seventh place match between Canada and Italy will kick off the final round at 15:00 local time.
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Original:  The fifth place match between Germany and Russia will be played at 16:20 local time, while the seventh place match between Canada and Italy will kick off the final round at 15:00 local time.
Revised:  The fifth place match between Germany and Russia will be played at 16:20 local time, while the seventh place match between Canada and Italy are to kick off the final round at 15:00 local time.
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