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Original:  In the night of August 25 to August 26,  fire broke out some run-down apartment building  at 20, Bd Vincent Auriol in Paris, France.
Revised:  In the night of August 25 to August 26, a fire broke out some run-down apartment building at 20, Bd Vincent Auriol in Paris, France.
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Original:  In the night of August 25 to August 26,  fire broke out some run-down apartment building  at 20, Bd Vincent Auriol in Paris, France.
Revised:  In the night of August 25 to August 26, fire broke out a run-down apartment building at 20, Bd Vincent Auriol in Paris, France.
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Original:  In the night of August 25 to August 26,  fire broke out some run-down apartment building  at 20, Bd Vincent Auriol in Paris, France.
Revised:  In the night of August 25 to August 26, fire broke out some run-down apartment building located at 20, Bd Vincent Auriol in Paris, France.
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Original: A new study in the Journal of Pediatrics indicates that childhood "ibuprofen asthma " is a health concern for many children.
Revised: A new study in the Journal of Pediatrics indicates that childhood ibuprofen-triggered asthma attacks is a health concern for many children.
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Original:  Ibuprofen-sensitive asthma attacks have been known about for quite some time, but a study has never before measured its risks and effects.
Revised:  Ibuprofen-sensitive asthma attacks have been known of for quite some time, but a study has never before measured its risks and effects.
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Original:  The child subjects were given either ibuprofen or  placebo in the trial.
Revised:  The child subjects were given either ibuprofen or a placebo in the trial.
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Original:  Within two hours of ibuprofen administration, four percent of the subjects had decreased lung function of more than 15 percent;
Revised:  Within two hours of ibuprofen administration, four percent of the subjects exhibited decreased lung function of more than 15 percent;
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Original:  Within two hours of ibuprofen administration, four percent of the subjects had decreased lung function of more than 15 percent;
Revised:  Within two hours of ibuprofen administration, four percent of the subjects had decreased lung function by more than 15 percent;
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Original:  Parents and doctors should be well aware of this 
Revised:  Parents and doctors should be aware of this 
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Original:  Parents and doctors should be well aware of this 
Revised:  Parents and doctors should be well aware of this and act accordingly
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Original:  The bomb decapitated the man, according to Evanston, Illinois police.
Revised:  Another explosive device had decapitated the man, according to Evanston, Illinois police.
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Original: File:Fountain Square Evanston.jpg|File photo of Evanston, Illinois A dead headless man was found near a suburban Chicago, Illinois school early Tuesday morning.
Revised: Fountain Square in Evanston, Illinois A dead headless man was found near a suburban Chicago, Illinois school early Tuesday morning.
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Original:  Classes at Nichols have were canceled Tuesday and are also, according to the school's website, canceled for Wednesday . During Tuesday, nearby schools kept students indoors for the day for fear of a bomb threat
Revised:  Classes at Nichols have were canceled Tuesday and are also, according to the school's website, canceled for Wednesday 
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Original: Fountain Square in Evanston, Illinois A dead headless man was found near a suburban Chicago, Illinois school early Tuesday morning.
Revised: Fountain Square in Evanston, Illinois A headless man was found near a suburban Chicago, Illinois school early Tuesday morning.
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Original:  Another explosive device had decapitated the man, according to Evanston , Illinois police.
Revised:  Another explosive device had decapitated the man, according to , Illinois police.
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Original:  The FBI is also helping with the investigation.
Revised:  The is also helping with the investigation.
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Original:  Classes at Nichols were canceled Tuesday and are also, according to the school's website, canceled for Wednesday
Revised:  Classes at Nichols were canceled Tuesday and are also, according to website, canceled for Wednesday
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Original:  O'Donnell's victory, coupled with the recent defeat of Lisa Murkowski by Joe Miller in Alaska, represent electoral victories for the Tea Party movement, which presents itself as a libertarian-oriented, constructionist conservative movement seeking to reclaim the Republican Party from established politicians
Revised:  The Tea Party movement, which presents itself as a libertarian-oriented, constructionist conservative movement seeking to reclaim the Republican Party from established politicians
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Original:  The Tea Party movement , which presents itself as a libertarian-oriented, constructionist conservative movement seeking to reclaim the Republican Party from established politicians
Revised:  The Tea Party movement presents itself as a libertarian-oriented, constructionist conservative movement seeking to reclaim the Republican Party from established politicians
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Original:  The Tea Party movement presents itself as a libertarian-oriented, constructionist conservative movement seeking to reclaim the Republican Party from established politicians
Revised:  The Tea Party movement presents itself as a conservative movement seeking to reclaim the Republican Party from established politicians
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Original:  Christine O'Donnell has defeated Mike Castle in the 2010 Delaware Republican senate primary , CNN and the Associated Press have announced.
Revised:  Christine O'Donnell has defeated Mike Castle in the 2010 Republican primary election for U.S. Senator from Delaware , CNN and the Associated Press have announced.
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Original:  Christine O'Donnell has defeated Mike Castle in the 2010 Republican primary election for U.S. Senator from Delaware, CNN and the Associated Press have announced.
Revised:  Christine O'Donnell has defeated Mike Castle in a Republican primary election for U.S. Senator from Delaware, CNN and the Associated Press have announced.
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Original: The Australian Government's plan for the full privatisation of Telstra, Australia's dominant telecommunications company of which the government owns 51.8\%, hit hurdles after criticism leveled at the government and the company by executives.
Revised: The Australian Government's plan for the full privatisation of Telstra, Australia's dominant telecommunications company , received criticism leveled at the government and the company by executives.
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Original: The Australian Government's plan for the full privatisation of Telstra, Australia's dominant telecommunications company of which the government owns 51.8\%, hit hurdles after criticism leveled at the government and the company by executives.
Revised: The Australian Government's plan for the full privatisation of Telstra, Australia's dominant telecommunications company of which the government owns 51.8\%, hit hurdles after criticism leveled at the government and company by executives.
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Original:  The  remaining 48.2\% of Telstra stock is held by shareholders, having been partially floated in the 1990's.
Revised:  The remaining 48.2\% of Telstra stock held by shareholders, having been partially floated in the 1990's.
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Original:  Phil Burgess, senior executive, made comments that Telstra was "a loser" , hindered by excessive regulations and that he would not reccomend purchasing the shares to his mother.
Revised:  Phil Burgess, senior executive, made comments that Telstra was "a loser" hindered by excessive regulations and that he would not reccomend purchasing the shares to his mother.
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Original:  Prime Minister John Howard repeated the sentiments, saying Telstra's problem was government ownership over government regulation.
Revised:  Prime Minister John Howard repeated those sentiments, saying Telstra's problem was government ownership over government regulation.
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Original:  There are plans for introducing legislation  which will approve the sale of the remainder of the government's share in the company in the next week .
Revised:  There are plans for introducing legislation next week which will approve the sale of the remainder of the government's share in the company in the next week .
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Original:  There are plans for introducing legislation  which will approve the sale of the remainder of the government's share in the company in the next week .
Revised:  There are plans for introducing legislation which will approve the sale of the remainder of the government's share .
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Original:  This is the first time such legislation will have gone through the Senate with the Coalition, consisting of the Liberal and National parties  controlling both the Senate and the House of Representatives , which may allow the predominantly Liberal-backed proposal to be passed.
Revised:  This is the first time such legislation will have gone through the Senate with the Coalition, consisting of the Liberal and National parties , controlling both the Senate and the House of Representatives , which may allow the predominantly Liberal-backed proposal to be passed.
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Original:  This is the first time such legislation will have gone through the Senate with the Coalition, consisting of the Liberal and National parties  controlling both the Senate and the House of Representatives , which may allow the predominantly Liberal-backed proposal to be passed.
Revised:  This is the first time such legislation will have gone through the Senate with the Coalition, consisting of the Liberal and National parties controlling both the Senate and the House of Representatives . This may allow the predominantly Liberal-backed proposal to be passed.
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Original:  Two major financial institutions divested their Telstra stock as shares dropped to the lowest point since mid last year
Revised:  Two major financial institutions divested their Telstra stock as shares dropped to their lowest point since mid last year
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Original: Phil Burgess, senior executive, made comments that Telstra was "a loser" hindered by excessive regulations and that he would not reccomend purchasing the shares to his mother.
Revised: Phil Burgess, senior executive, made comments that Telstra was "a loser" hindered by excessive regulations and that he would not recommend purchasing the shares to his mother.
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Original:  The government owns 51.8\%, with the remaining 48.2\% of Telstra stock held by shareholders, having been partially floated in the 1990's .
Revised:  The government owns 51.8\%, with the remaining 48.2\% of Telstra stock held by shareholders, having been partially floated in the 1990s .
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Original:  The disease is carried by pigs, which is then migrated to humans through mosquitos.
Revised:  The disease is carried by pigs, which then migrates to humans through mosquitos.
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Original:  This has prompted the Indian government to undertake such measures as the deployment of pig catchers in seriously affected areas, distributing thousands of mosquito curtains and spraying pesticides.
Revised:  The outbreak has prompted the Indian government to undertake such measures as the deployment of pig catchers in seriously affected areas, distributing thousands of mosquito curtains and spraying pesticides.
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Original:  This has prompted the Indian government to undertake such measures as the deployment of pig catchers in seriously affected areas, distributing thousands of mosquito curtains and spraying pesticides.
Revised:  This has prompted the Indian government to undertake such measures as deployment of pig catchers in seriously affected areas, distributing thousands of mosquito curtains and spraying pesticides.
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Original:  Several million vials of encephalitis vaccine have also been promised by the government, which will help prepare health agencies  next year.
Revised:  Several million vials of encephalitis vaccine have also been promised by the government, which will help prepare health agencies for next year.
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Original:  Plans for vaccines to be delivered to the historically most affected areas this year were delayed due to lack of funds and low prioritisation compared to other diseases.
Revised:  Plans for vaccines to be delivered to the historically most affected areas this year were delayed due to lack of funds and low prioritisation relative to other diseases.
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Original:  This is not the first time such an event has occurred : thousands have died of the disease over the past three decades in the region.
Revised:  This is not the first time such an event has occurred . Thousands have died of the disease over the past three decades in the region.
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Original:  The most common period for the disease is during the monsoon season in the winter months (July-September)
Revised:  The most common period for the disease is during the monsoon season (July-September)
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Original:  Over 400 have died in an outbreak of encephalitis in India's northern state of Uttar Pradesh and nearby regions, including neighbouring Nepal.
Revised: India's Uttar Pradesh province. Over 400 have died in an outbreak of encephalitis in India's northern state of Uttar Pradesh and nearby regions, including neighbouring Nepal.
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Original: India's Uttar Pradesh province .
Revised: India's Uttar Pradesh province 
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Original:  £1.5 million(€2.2 million) alone is for the evening at Hyde Park . Not
Revised:  £1.5 million(€2.2 million) alone is for the evening at Hyde Park Not
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Original:  £1.5 million(€2.2 million) alone is for the evening at Hyde Park . Not
Revised:  £1.5 million(€2.2 million) alone is for the evening at Hyde Park . 
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Original: The main stops included in the tour [[File:John Henry Newman by Sir John Everett Millais, 1st Bt.jpg|Portrait of Cardinal Newman]]
Revised:  [[File:John Henry Newman by Sir John Everett Millais, 1st Bt.jpg|Portrait of Cardinal Newman]]
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Original:  The protests The first recent source of conflict between British policies and Vatican positions emerged in February in the form of the Equality Bill, aimed at preventing discrimination against heterosexual, homosexual, and transsexual people.
Revised:  The first recent source of conflict between British policies and Vatican positions emerged in February in the form of the Equality Bill, aimed at preventing discrimination against heterosexual, homosexual, and transsexual people.
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Original:  Public safety and costs Even due to the pre-announced protests, the British Government has expected to spend for public safety and public policy in general more than w:Pound sterling£12 million €14 million).
Revised:  Even due to the pre-announced protests, the British Government has expected to spend for public safety and public policy in general more than w:Pound sterling£12 million €14 million).
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Original:  the visit was only announced on March 16th 2010 when it was officially confirmed by the Vatican.
Revised:  the visit was only announced on March 16, 2010 when it was officially confirmed by the Vatican.
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Original:  [[File:John Henry Newman by Sir John Everett Millais, 1st Bt.jpg|Portrait of Cardinal Newman  ]] When Pope Benedict departs from Rome Ciampino Airport at 8:10 am, he will be heading first to Holyrood Palace, Edinburgh, to meet Queen Elizabeth.
Revised:  [[File:John Henry Newman by Sir John Everett Millais, 1st Bt.jpg|Portrait of Cardinal Newman by Sir John Everett Millais ]] When Pope Benedict departs from Rome Ciampino Airport at 8:10 am, he will be heading first to Holyrood Palace, Edinburgh, to meet Queen Elizabeth.
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Original:  [[File:John Henry Newman by Sir John Everett Millais, 1st Bt.jpg|Portrait of Cardinal Newman  ]] When Pope Benedict departs from Rome Ciampino Airport at 8:10 am, he will be heading first to Holyrood Palace, Edinburgh, to meet Queen Elizabeth.
Revised:  [[File:John Henry Newman by Sir John Everett Millais, 1st Bt.jpg|Portrait of Cardinal Newman ]] When Pope Benedict departs from Rome Ciampino Airport at 8:10 am, he will first head to Holyrood Palace, Edinburgh, to meet Queen Elizabeth.
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Original:  After he has presided over several celebrations  , including an open-air Mass at Bellahouston Park, he will air travel to London.
Revised:  After he has presided over several celebrations , including an open-air Mass at Bellahouston Park, he will fly to London.
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Original:  On Friday and Saturday the papal delegation and its leader will stay in the British capital to meet several religious authorities, including the Archbishop of Canterbury, Rowan Williams, leader of the Church of England.
Revised:  On Friday and Saturday the papal delegation and its leader will remain in the British capital to meet several religious authorities, including the Archbishop of Canterbury, Rowan Williams, leader of the Church of England.
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Original:  Furthermore Benedict XVI will receive courtesy calls from Prime Minister David Cameron as well as the leader of  Opposition Harriet Harman and other political and institutional personalities.
Revised:  Furthermore Benedict XVI will receive courtesy calls from Prime Minister David Cameron as well as the leader of the Opposition Harriet Harman and other political and institutional personalities.
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Original: JPG|David Milliband , Foreign Secretary untill May 11th, 2010 ]] A further incident happened at the end of April 2010 when at the British Foreign Office a memo (attached to an official document which listed brainstormed ideas for the Pope's tour) suggested many sarcastic ideas for Benedict XVI.
Revised: JPG|David Miliband , Foreign Secretary untill May 11th, 2010 ]] A further incident happened at the end of April 2010 when at the British Foreign Office a memo (attached to an official document which listed brainstormed ideas for the Pope's tour) suggested many sarcastic ideas for Benedict XVI.
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Original: JPG|David Milliband , Foreign Secretary untill May 11th, 2010 ]] A further incident happened at the end of April 2010 when at the British Foreign Office a memo (attached to an official document which listed brainstormed ideas for the Pope's tour) suggested many sarcastic ideas for Benedict XVI.
Revised: JPG|David Milliband , Foreign Secretary until May 11th, 2010 ]] A further incident happened at the end of April 2010 when at the British Foreign Office a memo (attached to an official document which listed brainstormed ideas for the Pope's tour) suggested many sarcastic ideas for Benedict XVI.
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Original: JPG|David Milliband , Foreign Secretary untill May 11th, 2010 ]] A further incident happened at the end of April 2010 when at the British Foreign Office a memo (attached to an official document which listed brainstormed ideas for the Pope's tour) suggested many sarcastic ideas for Benedict XVI.
Revised: JPG|David Milliband , Foreign Secretary untill May 11th, 2010 ]] A further incident happened at the end of April 2010 when a British Foreign Office a memo (attached to an official document which listed brainstormed ideas for the Pope's tour) suggested many sarcastic ideas for Benedict XVI.
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Original: JPG|David Milliband , Foreign Secretary untill May 11th, 2010 ]] A further incident happened at the end of April 2010 when at the British Foreign Office a memo (attached to an official document which listed brainstormed ideas for the Pope's tour) suggested many sarcastic ideas for Benedict XVI.
Revised: JPG|David Milliband , Foreign Secretary untill May 11th, 2010 ]] A further incident happened at the end of April 2010 when at the British Foreign Office internal memo (attached to an official document which listed brainstormed ideas for the Pope's tour) suggested many sarcastic ideas for Benedict XVI.
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Original:  This included launching a condom brand marked "Benedict", or, during his visit in UK, inaugurating an abortion clinic, blessing a homosexual couple, or ordinating women as priests.
Revised:  This included launching a condom brand marked "Benedict", or, during his visit in UK, inaugurating an abortion clinic, blessing a homosexual couple, or ordaining women as priests.
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Original:  The Ministry immediately apologized and explained that the document was only a brainstorming that didn't represent the political positions of the Foreign Office.
Revised:  The Ministry immediately apologized and explained that the document was only brainstorming that didn't represent the political positions of the Foreign Office.
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Original:  In the United Kingdom , on July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to the new web site named " Protest The Pope " , which intends to organize the protests against the visit.
Revised:  In the United Kingdom in July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to the new web site named " Protest The Pope " , which intends to organize the protests against the visit.
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Original:  In the United Kingdom , on July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to the new web site named " Protest The Pope " , which intends to organize the protests against the visit.
Revised:  In the United Kingdom , on July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to a new web site named " Protest The Pope " , which intends to organize the protests against the visit.
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Original:  In the United Kingdom , on July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to the new web site named " Protest The Pope " , which intends to organize the protests against the visit.
Revised:  In the United Kingdom , on July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to the new web site named Protest The Pope " , which intends to organize the protests against the visit.
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Original:  In the United Kingdom , on July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to the new web site named " Protest The Pope " , which intends to organize the protests against the visit.
Revised:  In the United Kingdom , on July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to the new web site named " Protest The Pope , which intends to organize the protests against the visit.
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Original:  In the United Kingdom , on July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to the new web site named " Protest The Pope " , which intends to organize the protests against the visit.
Revised:  In the United Kingdom , on July, many of the people opposing the Pope's State visit gathered thanks to the new web site named " Protest The Pope " , which intends to organize protests against the visit.
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Original:  " Protest The Pope " has been planning the biggest march for Saturday in London, when the Catholic Pontiff will stay in the capital for his tour.
Revised:  Protest The Pope " has been planning the biggest march for Saturday in London, when the Catholic Pontiff will stay in the capital for his tour.
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Original:  " Protest The Pope " has been planning the biggest march for Saturday in London, when the Catholic Pontiff will stay in the capital for his tour.
Revised:  " Protest The Pope plans the biggest march for Saturday in London, when the Catholic Pontiff will stay in the capital for his tour.
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