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Original:  Dio (born Ronnie James Padavona) was born in July 10, 1942 in the American city of Portsmouth , New Hampshire.
Revised:  Dio (born Ronnie James Padavona) was born in July 10, 1942 in the American city of , New Hampshire.
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Original:  Before Black Sabbath he performed with several less successful bands, including Rainbow , led by former Deep Purple's Ritchie Blackmore, and Elf .
Revised:  Before Black Sabbath he performed with several less successful bands, including , led by former Deep Purple's Ritchie Blackmore, and Elf .
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Original:  Before Black Sabbath he performed with several less successful bands, including Rainbow , led by former Deep Purple's Ritchie Blackmore, and Elf .
Revised:  Before Black Sabbath he performed with several less successful bands, including Rainbow , led by former 's , and .
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Original:  He also had a very successful solo career under the simple name "Dio", and had recently reunited with former Black Sabbath band mates under the moniker Heaven and Hell . Some of Dio's hit songs were Holy Diver, Neon Knights, andThe Last In Line
Revised:  He also had a very successful solo career under the simple name "Dio", and had recently reunited with former Black Sabbath band mates under the moniker . Some of Dio's hit songs were Holy Diver, Neon Knights, andThe Last In Line
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Original:  He also had a very successful solo career under the simple name "Dio", and had recently reunited with former Black Sabbath band mates under the moniker Heaven and Hell . Some of Dio's hit songs were Holy Diver, Neon Knights, andThe Last In Line
Revised:  He also had a very successful solo career under the simple name "Dio", and had recently reunited with former Black Sabbath band mates under the moniker Heaven and Hell . Some of Dio's hit songs were , , and
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Original:  Turkish foreign minister w: Ahmet Davutoglu revealed the agreement Sunday night, which may alleviate international tensions about Iran's nuclear program.
Revised:  Turkish foreign minister Ahmet Davutoglu revealed the agreement Sunday night, which may alleviate international tensions about Iran's nuclear program.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Prior to the meeting, many had thought the chance of an agreement slim.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sPrior to the meeting, many had thought the chance of an agreement slim.
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Original:  The country had also rejected a previous plan by the United Nations for processing uranium elsewhere  
Revised:  The country had also rejected a previous plan by the United Nations for processing uranium elsewhere . 
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Original:  A seven year-old girl was shot and killed Sunday during a police raid in Detroit, Michigan,  when one of the officer's guns was accidentally set off during an argument with the girl's grandmother.
Revised:  A seven years-old girl was shot and killed Sunday during a police raid in Detroit, Michigan, when one of the officer's guns was accidentally set off during an argument with the girl's grandmother.
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Original:  A seven year-old girl was shot and killed Sunday during a police raid in Detroit, Michigan,  when one of the officer's guns was accidentally set off during an argument with the girl's grandmother.
Revised:  A seven year-old girl was shot and killed Sunday during a police raid in Detroit, Michigan, United States when one of the officer's guns was accidentally set off during an argument with the girl's grandmother.
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Original:  All we can do is to pledge an open and full investigation and to support Aiyana's family in whatever way they may be willing to accept from us at this time," said Assistant Police Chief Goodbee speaking on behalf of the Police Cheif , who was on vacation at the time of the shooting.
Revised:  All we can do is to pledge an open and full investigation and to support Aiyana's family in whatever way they may be willing to accept from us at this time," said Assistant Police Chief Goodbee speaking on behalf of the Police Chief , who was on vacation at the time of the shooting.
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Original:  They say my mother (MertillaJones) resisted them, that she tried to take an officer's gun.
Revised:  They say my mother Mertilla resisted them, that she tried to take an officer's gun.
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Original:  The incident is currently under investigation by the Detroit Police the Department.
Revised:  The incident is currently under investigation by the Detroit Police Department.
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Original:  A seven year-old girl was shot and killed Sunday during a police raid in Detroit , Michigan, United States when one of the officer's guns was accidentally set off during an argument with the girl's grandmother.
Revised:  A seven year-old girl was shot and killed Sunday during a police raid in , Michigan, United States when one of the officer's guns was accidentally set off during an argument with the girl's grandmother.
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Original:  In response, the Detroit Police Department held a press conference.
Revised:  In response, the held a press conference.
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Original:  A 111 run partnership between Craig Kieswetter, the man of the match and Kevin Pietersen, the man of the tournament  helped them in chasing down the target of 148 runs set by Australia.
Revised:  A 111 run partnership between Craig Kieswetter, the man of the match and Kevin Pietersen, the man of the tournament , helped them in chasing down the target of 148 runs set by Australia.
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Original:  In this connection,  Collingwood said: "[t]his is right up there, with the best," added all-rounder Collingwood, twice an Ashes winner.
Revised:  In this connection, all-rounder Collingwood said: "[t]his is right up there, with the best," added all-rounder Collingwood, twice an Ashes winner.
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Original:  To ] be the first (English) team to win a 'World Cup' is very special.
Revised:  To t] be the first (English) team to win a 'World Cup' is very special.
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Original:  To ] be the first (English) team to win a 'World Cup' is very special.
Revised:  To ]o be the first (English) team to win a 'World Cup' is very special.
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Original:  To ] be the first (English) team to win a 'World Cup' is very special.
Revised:  To ] be the first England team to win a 'World Cup' is very special.
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Original:  Newly elected English Prime Minister , David Cameron praised the English team.
Revised:  Newly elected UK Prime Minister David Cameron praised the English team.
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Original:  "Congratulations to (captain) Paul Collingwood and the England Twenty20 team on becoming world champions for the first time with a magnificent victory over Australia.
Revised:  "Congratulations to Paul Collingwood and the England Twenty20 team on becoming world champions for the first time with a magnificent victory over Australia.
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Original:  The magazine recently posted a cartoon on depicting , a leader of the terrorist group.
Revised:  The magazine recently posted a cartoon on depicting , a leader of the militant group.
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Original:  Gerard Biard, the editor-in-chief of Charlie Hebdo, stated: "I don't understand how people can attack a newspaper with heavy weapons.
Revised:  Gérard Biard, the editor-in-chief of Charlie Hebdo, stated: "I don't understand how people can attack a newspaper with heavy weapons.
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Original:  The  explosive device was placed next to a can of gasoline , but the gasoline did not ignite after the device detonated.
Revised:  The explosive device was placed next to a can of gasoline but the gasoline did not ignite after the device detonated.
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Original:  The FBI said the explosive device was placed next to a can of gasoline but the gasoline did not ignite after the device detonated.
Revised:  Officials said the explosive device was placed next to a can of gasoline but the gasoline did not ignite after the device detonated.
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Original:  The FBI statement continued: "He may be driving a 2000 or older model dirty, white pick-up truck with paneling, a dark colored bed liner, open tailgate, and a missing or covered license plate . " 
Revised:  The FBI statement continued: "He may be driving a 2000 or older model dirty, white pick-up truck with paneling, a dark colored bed liner, open tailgate, and a missing or covered license plate " 
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Original:  The FBI statement continued: "He may be driving a 2000 or older model dirty, white pick-up truck with paneling, a dark colored bed liner, open tailgate, and a missing or covered license plate . " 
Revised:  The FBI statement continued: "He may be driving a 2000 or older model dirty, white pick-up truck with paneling, a dark colored bed liner, open tailgate, and a missing or covered license plate . " .
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Original: Gene Southerland, owner of Mr. G's Hair Design Studio , said: "I was cutting somebody's hair and I heard the explosion.
Revised: Gene Southerland, owner of Mr. G's Hair Design Studios , said: "I was cutting somebody's hair and I heard the explosion.
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Original: Gene Southerland, owner of Mr. G's Hair Design Studios, said: "I was cutting somebody's hair and I heard the explosion .
Revised: Gene Southerland, owner of Mr. G's Hair Design Studios, said: "I was cutting somebody's hair and I heard the explosion ...
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Original:  Southerland continued: "Some neighbors came out and said they saw a Caucasian gentleman get into a white truck . [...] It was such a beautiful day and everything, sunny.
Revised:  Southerland continued: "Some neighbors came out and said they saw a Caucasian gentleman get into a white truck [...] It was such a beautiful day and everything, sunny.
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Original:  It's frightening . " 
Revised:  It's frightening " 
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Original:  It's frightening . " 
Revised:  It's frightening . " .
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Original:  Al Jazeera says up to fifty people may have died, although officials put the death toll at twenty in comments to thethe Agence France-Presse news service.
Revised:  Al Jazeera says up to fifty people may have died, although officials put the death toll at twenty in comments to the Agence France-Presse news service.
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Original:  The Indian government initiated a "massive anti-Maoist offensive" in October 2009, deploying 50,000 troops to several states, among them Chhattisgarh  
Revised:  The Indian government initiated a "massive anti-Maoist offensive" in October 2009, deploying 50,000 troops to several states, among them Chhattisgarh . 
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Original:  Al Jazeera and local television stations say up to fifty people may have died, although officials put the death toll at twenty in comments to the Agence France-Presse news service.
Revised:  Al Jazeera and local television stations say up to fifty people may have died, in comments to the Agence France-Presse news service.
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Original:  Senator was also elected today as the majority leader, marking the first time in eight years when Republicans have controlled both the House and Senate.
Revised:  Senator was also sworn in today as the majority leader, marking the first time in eight years when Republicans have controlled both the House and Senate.
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Original: Two of those voting against Boehner, Daniel Webster and , were not reappointed to the . Speaking to reporters, Boehner said that the House Republicans were "going to have a family conversation, which we had this morning, about bringing our team together".
Revised: Two of those voting against Boehner, Daniel Webster and , were not reappointed to the . Speaking to reporters, Boehner said the House Republicans were "going to have a family conversation, which we had this morning, about bringing our team together".
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Original:  Following the election of Boehner and McConnell, the White House announced that President would veto planned legislation by Republicans to start the construction of the oil pipeline.
Revised:  Following the election of Boehner and McConnell, the White House announced President would veto planned legislation by Republicans to start the construction of the oil pipeline.
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Original:  But it’  s not really clear that I couldn ’ t get back on it.
Revised:  But it’ But it' s not really clear that I couldn ’ t get back on it.
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Original:  But it’  s not really clear that I couldn ’ t get back on it.
Revised:  But it’ s not really clear that I couldn ' t get back on it.
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Original:  Twelve voted for Representative , three voted for Representative , two voted for Representative  .
Revised:  Twelve voted for Representative , three voted for Representative , two voted for Representative , and two for Representative .
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Original:  There were also votes for Representatives , , and , as well as votes for Senators and .
Revised:  There were also votes for Representatives , and , as well as votes for Senators and .
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Original:  White House press secretary Josh Earnest told reporters: "If this bill passes this Congress, the president wouldn ’ t sign it .
Revised:  White House press secretary Josh Earnest told reporters: "If this bill passes this Congress, the president wouldn ' t sign it .
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Original:  White House press secretary Josh Earnest told reporters: "If this bill passes this Congress, the president wouldn ’ t sign it .
Revised:  White House press secretary Josh Earnest told reporters: "If this bill passes this Congress, the president wouldn ’ t sign it "
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Original: The challengers to Boehner came primarily from the libertarian and hard right wing of the party, sometimes associated with the : one — — simply voted 'present' while the remaining twenty four voted for a variety of other candidates.
Revised: The challengers to Boehner came primarily from the libertarian and hard right wing of the party, sometimes associated with the . One — — simply voted 'present' while the remaining twenty four voted for a variety of other candidates.
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Original:  The law will become effective within a few days, after publication in the official gazette    
Revised:  The law will become effective within a few days, after publication in the official gazette . 
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Original:  Gay rights activists note that the law does not include provisions for same-sex couple's parental rights, including adoption,  which they say they will continue to fight for . Portugal will become the 6th country in Europe to legalize same-sex marriages (after Belgium, Spain, Norway, the Netherlands and Sweden).
Revised:  Gay rights activists note that the law does not include provisions for same-sex couple's parental rights, including adoption, for which they say they will continue to fight for . Portugal will become the 6th country in Europe to legalize same-sex marriages (after Belgium, Spain, Norway, the Netherlands and Sweden).
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Original:  Gay rights activists note that the law does not include provisions for same-sex couple's parental rights, including adoption,  which they say they will continue to fight for . Portugal will become the 6th country in Europe to legalize same-sex marriages (after Belgium, Spain, Norway, the Netherlands and Sweden).
Revised:  Gay rights activists note that the law does not include provisions for same-sex couple's parental rights, including adoption, which they say they will continue to fight . Portugal will become the 6th country in Europe to legalize same-sex marriages (after Belgium, Spain, Norway, the Netherlands and Sweden).
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Original:  As well, both Canada and South Africa  have legalized same-sex marriage
Revised:  Canada and South Africa have legalized same-sex marriage
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Original:  As well, both Canada and South Africa  have legalized same-sex marriage
Revised:  As well, both Canada and South Africa also have legalized same-sex marriage
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Original: On May 17, 2010, the Portuguese President, Anibal Cavaco Silva, signed into law a bill that allows same-sex marriages, making the predominately Catholic Portugal the 8th country in the world where same-sex marriage is allowed country-wide.
Revised: On May 17, 2010, the Portuguese President, Anibal Cavaco Silva, signed into law a bill that allows same-sex marriages, making the predominately Catholic Portugal the eighth country in the world where same-sex marriage is allowed country-wide.
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Original:  Portugal will become the 6th country in Europe to legalize same-sex marriages (after Belgium, Spain, Norway, the Netherlands and Sweden).
Revised:  Portugal will become the sixth country in Europe to legalize same-sex marriages (after Belgium, Spain, Norway, the Netherlands and Sweden).
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Original:  The death toll was not confirmed, although a police official and an Afghan military doctor reported nineteen or twenty to be dead and a further 47 people to be injured . General Ahmad Zia Yaftali, the chief military doctor of the Afghan army, claimed twenty people had been killed.
Revised:  The death toll was not confirmed, although a police official and some Afghan military doctor reported nineteen or twenty to be dead and a further 47 people to be injured . General Ahmad Zia Yaftali, the chief military doctor of the Afghan army, claimed twenty people had been killed.
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Original:  The death toll was not confirmed, although a police official and an Afghan military doctor reported nineteen or twenty to be dead and a further 47 people to be injured . General Ahmad Zia Yaftali, the chief military doctor of the Afghan army, claimed twenty people had been killed.
Revised:  The death toll was not confirmed, although a police official and an Afghan military doctor reported nineteen or twenty to be dead . 47 people to be injured . General Ahmad Zia Yaftali, the chief military doctor of the Afghan army, claimed twenty people had been killed.
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Original:  The death toll was not confirmed, although a police official and an Afghan military doctor reported nineteen or twenty to be dead and a further 47 people to be injured . General Ahmad Zia Yaftali, the chief military doctor of the Afghan army, claimed twenty people had been killed.
Revised:  The death toll was not confirmed, although a police official and an Afghan military doctor reported nineteen or twenty to be dead and a further 47 people were injured in the attack . General Ahmad Zia Yaftali, the chief military doctor of the Afghan army, claimed twenty people had been killed.
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Original:  "We have five bodies brought to our hospital so far [...] the number of the dead is more than 20," Yaftali told Agence France-Presse news agency  
Revised:  "We have five bodies brought to our hospital so far [...] the number of the dead is more than 20," Yaftali told Agence France-Presse news agency . 
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Original: A car bomb attack  which targeted a NATO (North Atlantic Treaty Organization) convoy in Kabul, the capital of Afghanistan  has killed or wounded dozens of people.
Revised: A car bomb attack which targeted a NATO (North Atlantic Treaty Organization) convoy in Kabul, the capital of Afghanistan , has killed or wounded dozens of people.
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Original:  DSP ( Deputy Superintendent of Police ), Iqbal Khan was said to be the target by other policemen.
Revised:  Deputy Superintendent of Police ), Iqbal Khan was said to be the target by other policemen.
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Original:  DSP ( Deputy Superintendent of Police ), Iqbal Khan was said to be the target by other policemen.
Revised:  DSP ( Deputy Superintendent of Police Iqbal Khan was said to be the target by other policemen.
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Original:  Deputy Superintendent of Police  Iqbal Khan was said to be the target by other policemen.
Revised:  Deputy Superintendent of Police (DSP) Iqbal Khan was said to be the target by other policemen.
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Original:  The death toll was confirmed by a doctor, Qibla Khan, who added 10 people had been wounded.
Revised:  The death toll was confirmed by a doctor, Qibla Khan, who stated that
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Original:  12 dead and 10 wounded people had been brought in . "We have 12 dead bodies in our emergency room , " the doctor told Reuters news agency via telephone . "We have received 12 dead bodies and 10 injured," Nasir Malik Akhtar, who heads the casualty department at Dera Ismail Khan hospital, told the media.
Revised:  12 dead and 10 wounded people had been brought in , telling Reuters news agency via telephone "We have 12 dead bodies in our emergency room , " the doctor told Reuters news agency via telephone . "We have received 12 dead bodies and 10 injured," Nasir Malik Akhtar, who heads the casualty department at Dera Ismail Khan hospital, told the media.
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Original:  12 dead and 10 wounded people had been brought in . "We have 12 dead bodies in our emergency room , " the doctor told Reuters news agency via telephone . "We have received 12 dead bodies and 10 injured," Nasir Malik Akhtar, who heads the casualty department at Dera Ismail Khan hospital, told the media.
Revised:  12 dead and 10 wounded people had been brought in . "We have 12 dead bodies in our emergency room " the doctor told Reuters news agency via telephone . "We have received 12 dead bodies and 10 injured," Nasir Malik Akhtar, who heads the casualty department at Dera Ismail Khan hospital, told the media.
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Original:  12 dead and 10 wounded people had been brought in . "We have 12 dead bodies in our emergency room , " the doctor told Reuters news agency via telephone . "We have received 12 dead bodies and 10 injured," Nasir Malik Akhtar, who heads the casualty department at Dera Ismail Khan hospital, told the media.
Revised:  12 dead and 10 wounded people had been brought in . "We have 12 dead bodies in our emergency room , " . "We have received 12 dead bodies and 10 injured," Nasir Malik Akhtar, who heads the casualty department at Dera Ismail Khan hospital, told the media.
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Original:  A state of emergency has been declared by the hospital to treat the injured
Revised:  A state of emergency has been declared by the hospital 
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Original: A bomb explosion in Dera Ismail Khan in the North-West Frontier Province of Pakistan killed at least twelve people  , officials said.
Revised: A bomb explosion in Dera Ismail Khan in the North-West Frontier Province of Pakistan killed at least twelve people today , officials said.
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Original:  Deputy Superintendent of Police (DSP) Iqbal Khan was said to be the target by other policemen .
Revised:  Deputy Superintendent of Police (DSP) Iqbal Khan was said to be the target .
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Original:  "It was a remote control bomb and was planted in a bicycle," Riaz Khan, a police spokesperson for the province, said to Agence France-Presse news agency.
Revised:  "It was a remote control bomb and was planted in a bicycle," Riaz Khan, a police spokesperson for the province, told the Agence France-Presse news agency.
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Original:  The death toll was confirmed by a doctor, Qibla Khan, who stated that 12 dead and 10 wounded people had been brought in, telling Reuters news agency via telephone "We have 12 dead bodies in our emergency room".
Revised:  "We have 12 dead bodies in our emergency room".
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Original:  The death toll was confirmed by a doctor, Qibla Khan, who stated that 12 dead and 10 wounded people had been brought in, telling Reuters news agency via telephone "We have 12 dead bodies in our emergency room".
Revised:  The death toll was confirmed by a doctor, Qibla Khan, who stated that 12 dead and 10 wounded people had been brought in, telling Reuters news agency via telephone "We have 
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