wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  It is a collapsing bag or sack like a footbag with an Ultra Suede single seam cover and beaded fill with other water absorbing high density materials.
Revised:  It is a collapsing bag or sack like a footbag with an Ultra Suede single seam cover and beaded fill with other water absorbing high-density materials.
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Original:  The water absorbing waterball like the Waboba Blast Ball and Water Ripper Ball are the only high performance waterballs designed to absorb water.
Revised:  The water absorbing waterball like the Waboba Blast Ball and Water Ripper Ball are the only high-performance waterballs designed to absorb water.
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Original: |Water Bag floating - water absorbing, balanced density design There are actually two types of high performance waterballs.
Revised: |Water Bag floating - water absorbing, balanced density design There are actually two types of high-performance waterballs.
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Original:  Because is collapses on impact on the water or in your hand, it is easier and safer to play with young children ages 4+. alt=Water Bag being thrown - the physics and motion.
Revised:  Because it collapses on impact on the water or in your hand, it is easier and safer to play with young children ages 4+. alt=Water Bag being thrown - the physics and motion.
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Original:  The bean bag-like design of the waterbag changes shape and conforms to a surface thus it collapses and is "slow acting" on impact.
Revised:  The beanbag-like design of the waterbag changes shape and conforms to a surface thus it collapses and is "slow acting" on impact.
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Original:  Slow acting on impact is an intended design characteristic that is very pleasing and safe in high speed play action.
Revised:  Slow acting on impact is an intended design characteristic that is very pleasing and safe in high-speed play action.
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Original:  Safety issues Most waterballs currently available, while perfectly functional in water, are not designed to work well on  hard surface.
Revised:  Safety issues Most waterballs currently available, while perfectly functional in water, are not designed to work well on a hard surface.
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Original:  Play action is generally between players and play patterns can involve a variety of apparatus and equipment, even special pools with goals and watercourts.
Revised:  Play is generally between players and play patterns can involve a variety of apparatus and equipment, even special pools with goals and watercourts.
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Original:  Play action is generally between players and play patterns can involve a variety of apparatus and equipment, even special pools with goals and watercourts.
Revised:  Play action is generally between players and play patterns can involve a variety of apparatus and equipment, such as special pools with goals and watercourts.
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Original:  Director on the central board of the Reserve Bank of India (2000–2009) Member, Prime Minister of India's Council on Trade and Industry Member, Investment commission of India Member, India-USA CEO Council Member, National Knowledge Commission, India
Revised:  Director on the central board of the Reserve Bank of India (2000–2009) Member, Prime Minister of India's Council on Trade and Industry Member, Investment commission of India Member, India-USA CEO Council Member, National Knowledge Commission, Indi
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Original:  Director on the central board of the Reserve Bank of India (2000–2009) Member, Prime Minister of India's Council on Trade and Industry Member, Investment commission of India Member, India-USA CEO Council Member, National Knowledge Commission, Indi
Revised:  Director on the central board of the Reserve Bank of India (2000–2009) Member, Prime Minister of India's Council on Trade and Industry Member, Investment commission of India Member, India-USA CEO Council Member, National Knowledge Commission, India
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Original:  The BJP and its National Democratic Alliance won 73 out of 80 seats.
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Original: Amit Anil Chandra Shah (born 22 October 1964) (mota bhai )is an Indian politician currently serving as the Minister of Home Affairs and the first Minister of Co-operation of India.
Revised: Amit mc Chandra Shah (born 22 October 1964) (mota bhai )is an Indian politician currently serving as the Minister of Home Affairs and the first Minister of Co-operation of India.
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Original: Amit Anil Chandra Shah (born 22 October 1964) is an Indian politician currently serving as the Minister of Home Affairs and the first Minister of Co-operation of India.
Revised: Amit Anilchandra Shah (born 22 October 1964) is an Indian politician currently serving as the Minister of Home Affairs and the first Minister of Co-operation of India.
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Original:  He is the chief strategist of the BJP and a close aide to Prime Minister Narendra Modi.
Revised:  He is the chief strategist of the BJP and a close aide to Narendra Modi.
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Original: Amit Anilchandra Shah (born 22 October 1964) is an Indian politician currently serving as the Minister of Home Affairs and the first Minister of Co-operation of India.
Revised: Amit Anil Chandra Shah (born 22 October 1964) is an Indian politician currently serving as the Minister of Home Affairs and the first Minister of Co-operation of India.
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Original: In Skulptur, Chaikov advocates avant-garde sculpture as a contribution to a new Jewish URL Skulptur was published by Melukhe Farlag in Kiev, and contains 15 pages.
Revised: In Skulptur, Chaikov advocates avant-garde sculpture as a contribution to a new Jewish art. Skulptur was published by Melukhe Farlag in Kiev, and contains 15 pages.
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Original:  And according to the Ministry of Overseas Pakistanis and Human Resource Development of the Government of Pakistan, approximately 8.8 million Pakistanis live abroad, with the vast majority (over 4.7 million) residing in the Arab states of the Persian Gulf of the Middle East.
Revised:  According to the Ministry of Overseas Pakistanis and Human Resource Development of the Government of Pakistan, approximately 8.8 million Pakistanis live abroad, with the vast majority (over 4.7 million) residing in the Arab states of the Persian Gulf of the Middle East.
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Original: Pakistanis ( "Pakistani Nation" ) are the nationals and citizens of the Islamic Republic of Pakistan.
Revised: Pakistanis ( , ) are the nationals and citizens of the Islamic Republic of Pakistan.
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Original:  Ethnically and linguistically diverse, the majority of Pakistanis natively speak languages belonging to the Indo-Aryan and Iranian language families.
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Original:  According to the 2017  census, the estimated population of Pakistan was over 212,000,000 people, making it the fifth-most populous country on Earth.
Revised:  According to the 2017 census, the population of Pakistan was over 212,000,000 people, making it the fifth-most populous country on Earth.
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Original:  In addition to its four provinces, Pakistan also administers two disputed territories in the Kashmir region known as Azad Jammu and Kashmir and Gilgit−Baltistan  ;
Revised:  In addition to its four provinces, Pakistan also administers two disputed territories known as Azad Jammu and Kashmir and Gilgit−Baltistan ;
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Original:  Pakistan also hosts significant populations of Dravidian peoples, the majority of whom are historical South Indians (e.g. Muslims from Hyderabad Deccan ) belonging to the multiethnic community of Muhajirs (;
Revised:  Pakistan also hosts significant populations of Dravidian peoples, the majority of whom are South Indians who trace their historical roots to regions such as Hyderabad Deccan and are identified with the multi-ethnic community of Muhajirs (;
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Original:  also referred to as Urdu-speaking peoples ), whose arrival to the country en masse occurred as a direct result of the Partition of British India along religious lines in 1947.
Revised:  also referred to as Urdu-speaking people ), whose arrival to the country en masse occurred as a direct result of the Partition of British India along religious lines in 1947.
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Original:  Major ethnolinguistic groups in the country include Punjabis, Pashtuns, Sindhis, Saraikis , and Baloch people, with significant numbers of Kashmiris, Brahuis, Hindkowans, Paharis, Shina people, Burusho people, Wakhis, Baltis, Chitralis and other various minorities.
Revised:  Major ethnolinguistic groups in the country include Punjabis, Pashtuns, Sindhis, Saraikis and Baloch people, with significant numbers of Kashmiris, Brahuis, Hindkowans, Paharis, Shina people, Burusho people, Wakhis, Baltis, Chitralis and other various minorities.
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Original:  The existence of Pakistan as an Islamic state has led to the injection of Islam into most aspects of  culture and everyday life, which has accordingly impacted the historical values and traditions of the Muslim-majority population.
Revised:  The existence of Pakistan as an Islamic state has led to the injection of Islam into most aspects of Pakistani culture and everyday life, which has accordingly impacted the historical values and traditions of the Muslim-majority population.
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Original:  The national dress of Pakistan is known as the shalwar kameez, a unisex garment commonly worn throughout Central and South Asia.
Revised:  The national dress of Pakistan is the shalwar kameez, a unisex garment commonly worn throughout Central and South Asia.
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Original:  Irreligion Irreligion, agnosticism and atheism are present amongst a minority of Pakistanis, the majority of whom belong to the newer generations.
Revised:  Irreligion Irreligion, agnosticism and atheism are present amongst a minority of Pakistanis, the majority of whom belong to the new generations.
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Original:  Distribution of Pakistani diaspora The Pakistani diaspora maintains a significant presence in the Middle East, Europe, North America , and Australia.
Revised:  Distribution of Pakistani diaspora The Pakistani diaspora maintains a significant presence in the Middle East, Europe, North America and Australia.
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Original:  According to the Ministry of Overseas Pakistanis and Human Resource Development of the Government of Pakistan, approximately 8.8 million Pakistanis live abroad, with the vast majority (over 4.7 million) residing in the Arab states of the Persian Gulf of the Middle East .
Revised:  According to the Ministry of Overseas Pakistanis and Human Resource Development of the Government of Pakistan, approximately 8.8 million Pakistanis live abroad, with the vast majority (over 4.7 million) residing in the Arab states of the Persian Gulf .
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Original: "Moscow Hosts "Rose of the World 2008" a Cultural Forum" - Russia's Presidency of the Shanghai Cooperation URL
Revised: "Moscow Hosts "Rose of the World 2008" a Cultural Forum" - Russia's Presidency of the Shanghai Cooperation Organization
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Original:  In 980, officials and generals gathered at Hoa Lư and queen Dương Vân Nga brought out the king 's robe to put on Lê Hoàn, offered him the throne, and subsequently ended the rule of the Đinh dynasty and transferred power to the Lê family.
Revised:  In 980, officials and generals gathered at Hoa Lư and empress Dương Vân Nga brought out the king 's robe to put on Lê Hoàn, offered him the throne, and subsequently ended the rule of the Đinh dynasty and transferred power to the Lê family.
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Original:  Bộ Lĩnh ordered more than ten arrows shot in Liễn ’ s direction.
Revised:  Bộ Lĩnh ordered more than ten arrows shot in Liễn ' s direction.
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Original:  Bộ Lĩnh awarded additional titles such as "Buddhist Priest Overseer" to Đại Việt ’ s ranking monks, and in 971 assigned Buddhism ’ s top position, that of great preceptor (đại sư) for reforming the Việt (khuông Việt), to the patriarch of the Vô Ngôn Thông sect, Ngô Chân Lưu, who occupied the post until his death forty years later.
Revised:  Bộ Lĩnh awarded additional titles such as "Buddhist Priest Overseer" to Đại Việt ' s ranking monks, and in 971 assigned Buddhism ’ s top position, that of great preceptor (đại sư) for reforming the Việt (khuông Việt), to the patriarch of the Vô Ngôn Thông sect, Ngô Chân Lưu, who occupied the post until his death forty years later.
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Original:  Bộ Lĩnh awarded additional titles such as "Buddhist Priest Overseer" to Đại Việt ’ s ranking monks, and in 971 assigned Buddhism ’ s top position, that of great preceptor (đại sư) for reforming the Việt (khuông Việt), to the patriarch of the Vô Ngôn Thông sect, Ngô Chân Lưu, who occupied the post until his death forty years later.
Revised:  Bộ Lĩnh awarded additional titles such as "Buddhist Priest Overseer" to Đại Việt ’ s ranking monks, and in 971 assigned Buddhism ' s top position, that of great preceptor (đại sư) for reforming the Việt (khuông Việt), to the patriarch of the Vô Ngôn Thông sect, Ngô Chân Lưu, who occupied the post until his death forty years later.
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Original:  External link The Đinh dynasty on globalsecurity.org
Revised:  External links The Đinh dynasty on globalsecurity.org
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Original:  He  became a branch manager for a wholesaler in nearby Yokohama  but his branch lost money after extending too much credit to customers because of leniency.
Revised:  He later became a branch manager for a wholesaler in nearby Yokohama but his branch lost money after extending too much credit to customers because of leniency.
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Original:  He  became a branch manager for a wholesaler in nearby Yokohama  but his branch lost money after extending too much credit to customers because of leniency.
Revised:  He became a branch manager for a wholesaler in nearby Yokohama , but his branch lost money after extending too much credit to customers because of leniency.
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Original:  He later became a branch manager for a wholesaler in nearby Yokohama, but his branch lost money after extending too much credit to customers because of leniency.
Revised:  He later became a branch manager for a wholesaler in nearby Yokohama, but his branch lost money after extending too much credit to customers due to leniency.
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Original:  Since employees were  personally responsible for such losses, Morinaga searched for a way to repay his boss.
Revised:  Since employees were considered personally responsible for such losses, Morinaga searched for a way to repay his boss.
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Original:  However, the venture was unsuccessful due to local boycotting due to his race  . During the visit, he  converted to Christianity.
Revised:  However, local boycotting due to his race . During the visit, he converted to Christianity.
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Original:  However, the venture was unsuccessful due to local boycotting due to his race  . During the visit, he  converted to Christianity.
Revised:  However, the venture was unsuccessful due to local boycotting due to his race caused his venture to be unsuccessful . During the visit, he converted to Christianity.
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Original:  However, the venture was unsuccessful due to local boycotting due to his race  . During the visit, he  converted to Christianity.
Revised:  However, the venture was unsuccessful due to local boycotting due to his race . During the visit, he also converted to Christianity.
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Original:  However, local boycotting due to his race (because of the events of WW2) caused his venture to be unsuccessful.
Revised:  However, local boycotting due to his race caused his venture to be unsuccessful.
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Original:  In 1899, he founded what would become Morinaga & Co, the first modern candy company in Japan, and the first to produce chocolates in the country.
Revised:  In 1899, he founded what would become Morinaga & Co, the first modern candy company in Japan, and the first to mass-produce chocolates in the country.
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Original:  However, local boycotting due to his race caused his venture to be unsuccessful . During the visit, he also converted to Christianity.
Revised:  Racism against Asians, common at the time, made business difficult . During the visit, he also converted to Christianity.
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Original:  Candy pioneer in Japan During his time in the United States, an unidentified American gave him a piece of candy which was a new appetizing treat for Morinaga.
Revised:  Candy pioneer in Japan During his time in the United States, an American gave him a piece of candy which was a new appetizing treat for Morinaga.
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Original:  After interviewing a number of  Japanese people in the United States , Moringa discovered that marshmallows were popular but unavailable in Japan.
Revised:  After interviewing a number of Japanese people in the United States had told Moringa that they liked marshmallows, but that they were unavailable in Japan.
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Original:  Later that year, he opened a candy shop in Tokyo (Minato City), the Morinaga Western Confectionery Shop (later Morinaga Confectionery), with Hanzaburo Matsuzaki, a business partner and fellow Christian.
Revised:  Later that year, he opened a candy shop in Tokyo (Minato City), the Morinaga Western Confectionery Shop (later Morinaga Confectionery), with Hanzaburo Matsuzaki, a 
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Original:  Morinaga later founded Morinaga%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Co, the first modern candy company in Japan and the first to produce chocolates in the country when it started in 1918, one year after opening a company dairy.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Co, the first modern candy company in Japan and the first to produce chocolates in the country when it started in 1918, one year after opening a company dairy.
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Original:  Another difficulty was that Japan had little arable land for crops and no locally produced corn or sugar cane to make corn syrup . Currently, Morinaga%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Co. is one of Japan's biggest candy makers, with 2008 sales of $1.5 billion and over 5,000 employees.
Revised:  Another difficulty was that Japan had little arable land for crops and no locally produced corn or sugar cane to make corn syrup Currently, Morinaga%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Co. is one of Japan's biggest candy makers, with 2008 sales of $1.5 billion and over 5,000 employees.
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Original:  Another difficulty was that Japan had little arable land for crops and no locally produced corn or sugar cane to make corn syrup . Currently, Morinaga%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Co. is one of Japan's biggest candy makers, with 2008 sales of $1.5 billion and over 5,000 employees.
Revised:  Another difficulty was that Japan had little arable land for crops and no locally produced corn or sugar cane to make corn syrup . %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Co. is one of Japan's biggest candy makers, with 2008 sales of $1.5 billion and over 5,000 employees.
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Original: The Republic of Vevčani ( ) – also known as the Independent Republic of Vevčani – was a short lived self-proclaimed country on the territory of  Macedonia after the fall of Yugoslavia in 1991 and as of 2000 is a micronation.
Revised: The Republic of Vevčani ( ) – also known as the Independent Republic of Vevčani – was a short lived self-proclaimed country on the territory of North Macedonia after the fall of Yugoslavia in 1991 and as of 2000 is a micronation.
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Original: Jury stress or juror stress refers to physical and mental tension that affects members of juries.
Revised: Jury stress or juror stress is physical and mental tension that affects members of juries.
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Original:  In the cases of murder or sexual crimes, evidence can be explicit causing potential harm to the URL Jurors can also feel a 'burden of responsibility' - they hold large amounts of power over someone else's life and the possibility of imprisonment or a fine for that URL Jury stress could, in some cases, lead to symptoms of Post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) and increased anxiety, depression or physical symptoms such as an increase in blood pressure or URL References Further reading URL
Revised:  In the cases of murder or sexual crimes, evidence can be explicit causing potential harm to the URL Jurors can also feel a 'burden of responsibility' - they hold large amounts of power over someone else's life and the possibility of imprisonment or a fine for that person. Jury stress could, in some cases, lead to symptoms of Post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) and increased anxiety, depression or physical symptoms such as an increase in blood pressure or URL References Further reading URL
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Original:  In the cases of murder or sexual crimes, evidence can be explicit causing potential harm to the URL Jurors can also feel a 'burden of responsibility' - they hold large amounts of power over someone else's life and the possibility of imprisonment or a fine for that URL Jury stress could, in some cases, lead to symptoms of Post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) and increased anxiety, depression or physical symptoms such as an increase in blood pressure or URL References Further reading URL
Revised:  In the cases of murder or sexual crimes, evidence can be explicit causing potential harm to the URL Jurors can also feel a 'burden of responsibility' - they hold large amounts of power over someone else's life and the possibility of imprisonment or a fine for that URL Jury stress could, in some cases, lead to symptoms of Post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) and increased anxiety, depression or physical symptoms such as an increase in blood pressure or nausea. References Further reading URL
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Original:  In the cases of murder or sexual crimes, evidence can be explicit causing potential harm to the URL Jurors can also feel a 'burden of responsibility' - they hold large amounts of power over someone else's life and the possibility of imprisonment or a fine for that person.
Revised:  In the cases of murder or sexual crimes, evidence can be explicit causing potential harm to the jury. Jurors can also feel a 'burden of responsibility' - they hold large amounts of power over someone else's life and the possibility of imprisonment or a fine for that person.
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Original:  Significant was the British West African colonial school curriculum  .
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Original:  Significant was the British West African colonial school curriculum  .
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Original:  Each of these countries and areas are a post-colonial period, or what the Ghanaian writer Kwame Appiah dubs neo-colonialism.
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Original:  Each of these countries and areas are a post-colonial period, or what the Ghanaian writer Kwame Appiah dubs neo-colonialism.
Revised:  Each of these countries and areas are artifacts of the post-colonial period, or what the Ghanaian writer Kwame Appiah dubs neo-colonialism.
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Original: Definition When he coined the term "clinical epidemiology" in 1938, John Paul defined it as "a marriage between quantitative concepts used by epidemiologists to study disease in populations and decision-making in the individual case which is the daily fare of clinical medicine".
Revised: Definition When he coined the term "clinical epidemiology" in 1938, jean Paul defined it as "a marriage between quantitative concepts used by epidemiologists to study disease in populations and decision-making in the individual case which is the daily fare of clinical medicine".
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