wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Wagga Wagga , New South Wales — Earlier today, Australian opposition leader Tony Abbott competed in the 2012 Lake to Lagoon fun run in Wagga Wagga, alongside with the Member for the Riverina, Michael McCormack , amongst over 2000 runners and walkers.
Revised: Wagga Wagga , New South Wales — Earlier today, Australian opposition leader Tony Abbott competed in the 2012 Lake to Lagoon fun run in Wagga Wagga, alongside with the for the Riverina, Michael McCormack , amongst over 2000 runners and walkers.
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Original: Wagga Wagga , New South Wales — Earlier today, Australian opposition leader Tony Abbott competed in the 2012 Lake to Lagoon fun run in Wagga Wagga, alongside with the Member for the Riverina, Michael McCormack , amongst over 2000 runners and walkers.
Revised: Wagga Wagga , New South Wales — Earlier today, Australian opposition leader Tony Abbott competed in the 2012 Lake to Lagoon fun run in Wagga Wagga, alongside with the Member for the Riverina, , amongst over 2000 runners and walkers.
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Original:  Abbott was interviewed by Master of Ceremonies , Leigh Spokes;
Revised:  Abbott was interviewed by , Leigh Spokes;
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Original: After the warm-up by the Workout Wagga girls, Abbott started at the front of the pack but was quickly over taken by the faster runners, crossing the finishing line at position 234 with a time of 46 minutes and 49 seconds.
Revised: After the warm-up by the Workout Wagga girls, Abbott started at the front of the pack but was quickly overtaken by the faster runners, crossing the finishing line at position 234 with a time of 46 minutes and 49 seconds.
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Original: After the warm-up by the Workout Wagga girls, Abbott started at the front of the pack but was quickly over taken by the faster runners, crossing the finishing line at position 234 with a time of 46 minutes and 49 seconds.
Revised: After the warm-up by the Workout Wagga girls, Abbott started at the front of the pack but was quickly over taken by the faster runners, crossing the finishing line at position 234 with a time of 46 minutes 49 seconds.
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Original:  After crossing the line Abbott mingled and posing for photographs with the public.
Revised:  After crossing the line Abbott mingled and posed for photographs with the public.
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Original:  Abbott was interviewed by , Leigh Spokes;
Revised:  Abbott was interviewed by Leigh Spokes;
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Original:  when asked about the event, he stated that it was a “ great community event ” but found the course “hard going” . Shortly after the interview and talking to people, Abbott and his advisors left the event due to his tight schedule.
Revised:  when asked about the event, he stated that it was a " great community event ” but found the course “hard going” . Shortly after the interview and talking to people, Abbott and his advisors left the event due to his tight schedule.
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Original:  when asked about the event, he stated that it was a “ great community event ” but found the course “hard going” . Shortly after the interview and talking to people, Abbott and his advisors left the event due to his tight schedule.
Revised:  when asked about the event, he stated that it was a “ great community event " but found the course “hard going” . Shortly after the interview and talking to people, Abbott and his advisors left the event due to his tight schedule.
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Original:  when asked about the event, he stated that it was a “ great community event ” but found the course “hard going” . Shortly after the interview and talking to people, Abbott and his advisors left the event due to his tight schedule.
Revised:  when asked about the event, he stated that it was a “ great community event ” but found the course "hard going" . Shortly after the interview and talking to people, Abbott and his advisors left the event due to his tight schedule.
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Original:  First place went to James Davy who finished across the line at 30 minutes and 15 seconds, second place went to Matthew Ho finishing in 31 minutes and 16 seconds  and in third place was Caleb Noble at 31 minutes and 50 seconds.
Revised:  First place went to James Davy who finished across the line at 30 minutes 15 seconds, second place went to Matthew Ho finishing in 31 minutes and 16 seconds and in third place was Caleb Noble at 31 minutes and 50 seconds.
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Original:  First place went to James Davy who finished across the line at 30 minutes and 15 seconds, second place went to Matthew Ho finishing in 31 minutes and 16 seconds  and in third place was Caleb Noble at 31 minutes and 50 seconds.
Revised:  First place went to James Davy who finished across the line at 30 minutes and 15 seconds, second place went to Matthew Ho finishing in 31 minutes 16 seconds and in third place was Caleb Noble at 31 minutes and 50 seconds.
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Original:  First place went to James Davy who finished across the line at 30 minutes and 15 seconds, second place went to Matthew Ho finishing in 31 minutes and 16 seconds  and in third place was Caleb Noble at 31 minutes and 50 seconds.
Revised:  First place went to James Davy who finished across the line at 30 minutes and 15 seconds, second place went to Matthew Ho finishing in 31 minutes and 16 seconds , and in third place was Caleb Noble at 31 minutes and 50 seconds.
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Original:  First place went to James Davy who finished across the line at 30 minutes and 15 seconds, second place went to Matthew Ho finishing in 31 minutes and 16 seconds  and in third place was Caleb Noble at 31 minutes and 50 seconds.
Revised:  First place went to James Davy who finished across the line at 30 minutes and 15 seconds, second place went to Matthew Ho finishing in 31 minutes and 16 seconds and in third place was Caleb Noble at 31 minutes 50 seconds.
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Original:  First place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes and 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt finishing in 40 minutes and 1 second  and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes and 9 seconds
Revised:  First place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt finishing in 40 minutes and 1 second and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes and 9 seconds
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Original:  First place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes and 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt finishing in 40 minutes and 1 second  and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes and 9 seconds
Revised:  First place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes and 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt finishing in 40 minutes 1 second and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes and 9 seconds
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Original:  First place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes and 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt finishing in 40 minutes and 1 second  and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes and 9 seconds
Revised:  First place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes and 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt finishing in 40 minutes and 1 second , and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes and 9 seconds
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Original:  First place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes and 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt finishing in 40 minutes and 1 second  and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes and 9 seconds
Revised:  First place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes and 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt finishing in 40 minutes and 1 second and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes 9 seconds
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Original:  In the open women's category, first place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt finishing in 40 minutes 1 second , and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes 9 seconds
Revised:  In the open women's category, first place went to Rachel Stanton who finished across the line at 36 minutes 39 seconds, second place went to Carmel Kahlefeldt , and in third place was Jessie Wythes at 40 minutes 9 seconds
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Original:  Shadow education secretary David Willetts said the move would "harm hopes of integrating communities and drive non-Muslims away  .
Revised:  Shadow education secretary David Willetts said the move would "harm hopes of integrating communities and drive non-Muslims away " .
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Original:  But for the first time in Britain, a Muslim school has declared that 'all ' girl studentswill be forced to wear the hijab , including non-Muslim students . Earlier this month Jack Straw called upon Muslim women not to wear the veil (know as a Burqa or Niqab) when meeting with MPs, saying its makes relations between different communities more difficult  
Revised:  But for the first time in Britain, a Muslim school has declared that all girl students, including non-Muslims, will be required to wear the hijab , including non-Muslim students . Earlier this month Jack Straw called upon Muslim women not to wear the veil (know as a Burqa or Niqab) when meeting with MPs, saying its makes relations between different communities more difficult 
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Original:  But for the first time in Britain, a Muslim school has declared that 'all ' girl studentswill be forced to wear the hijab , including non-Muslim students . Earlier this month Jack Straw called upon Muslim women not to wear the veil (know as a Burqa or Niqab) when meeting with MPs, saying its makes relations between different communities more difficult  
Revised:  But for the first time in Britain, a Muslim school has declared that 'all ' girl studentswill be forced to wear the hijab . Earlier this month Jack Straw called upon Muslim women not to wear the veil (know as a Burqa or Niqab) when meeting with MPs, saying its makes relations between different communities more difficult 
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Original:  But for the first time in Britain, a Muslim school has declared that 'all ' girl studentswill be forced to wear the hijab , including non-Muslim students . Earlier this month Jack Straw called upon Muslim women not to wear the veil (know as a Burqa or Niqab) when meeting with MPs, saying its makes relations between different communities more difficult  
Revised:  But for the first time in Britain, a Muslim school has declared that 'all ' girl studentswill be forced to wear the hijab , including non-Muslim students . Earlier this month Jack Straw called upon Muslim women not to wear the veil (know as a Burqa or Niqab) when meeting with MPs, saying its makes relations between different communities more difficult . 
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Original:  But for the first time in Britain, a Muslim school has declared that 'all ' girl studentswill be forced to wear the hijab , including non-Muslim students . Earlier this month Jack Straw called upon Muslim women not to wear the veil (know as a Burqa or Niqab) when meeting with MPs, saying its makes relations between different communities more difficult  
Revised:  But for the first time in Britain, a Muslim school has declared that 'all ' girl studentswill be forced to wear the hijab , including non-Muslim students . Earlier this month Jack Straw called upon Muslim women not to wear the veil (know as a Burqa or Niqab) when meeting with MPs, saying its makes relations between different communities more difficult Related new
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Original:  The Mail%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Guardian and the Bangkok Post state that the militants took Yao's severed head , and later deposited it in the village where he lived, about 12 miles away.
Revised:  The Mail%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Bangkok Post state that the militants took Yao's severed head , and later deposited it in the village where he lived, about 12 miles away.
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Original:  Police Colonel Thawan commented to the Bangkok Post that the severed head was booby-trapped  
Revised:  Colonel Thawan commented to the Bangkok Post that the severed head was booby-trapped 
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Original:  Police Colonel Thawan commented to the Bangkok Post that the severed head was booby-trapped  
Revised:  Police Colonel Thawan commented to the Bangkok Post that the severed head was booby-trapped . 
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Original:  Colonel Thawan commented to the Bangkok Post that the severed head was booby-trapped   .
Revised:  Colonel Thawan commented to the Bangkok Post that the severed head was booby-trapped . .
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Original: The seperatists are believed to be affiliated with the Pattani United Liberation Organization (PULO).
Revised: The separatists are believed to be affiliated with the Pattani United Liberation Organization (PULO).
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Original:  This is the 20th known instance of  PULO insurgents beheading a victim, the last was a 41-year-old rubber worker.
Revised:  This is the 20th known instance of suspected PULO insurgents beheading a victim, the last was a 41-year-old rubber worker.
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Original:  Items such as bottled water, radios and flashlights could be among those items eleigable for reimbursiment , according toa press conference with city officials and National Grid this afternoon.
Revised:  Items such as bottled water, radios and flashlights could be among those items eligible for reimbursement , according toa press conference with city officials and National Grid this afternoon.
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Original: Delaware Park, located near the Albright Knox Art Gallery is nearly flooded as the banks of Hoyt Lake are begining to over flow.
Revised: Delaware Park, located near the Albright Knox Art Gallery is nearly flooded as the banks of Hoyt Lake are beginning to over flow.
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Original:  During the late afternoon on October 14, the Co-op aquired a generator which is currently supplying the entire store with electricity, but power itself has not yet been restored.
Revised:  During the late afternoon on October 14, the Co-op acquired a generator which is currently supplying the entire store with electricity, but power itself has not yet been restored.
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Original:  Many were taken within less than 1 mile from Forest and Elmwood in Buffalo  
Revised:  Many were taken within less than 1 mile from Forest and Elmwood in Buffalo . 
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Original:  Electric crews from Massachusetts and Rhode Island, and Pennsylvania have been called in to assist in the clean-up efforts, but power to many areas may not be fully restored until next weekend.
Revised:  Electric crews from Massachusetts , Rhode Island, and Pennsylvania have been called in to assist in the clean-up efforts, but power to many areas may not be fully restored until next weekend.
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Original:  The Federal Emergency Management Agency or FEMA has cleared the way for at least  $5 million USD to be given to Erie County and Western New York to be used for the efforts of cleaning up the city.
Revised:  The Federal Emergency Management Agency or FEMA has cleared the way for at least $5 million to be given to Erie County and Western New York to be used for the efforts of cleaning up the city.
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Original:  Delaware Park, located near the Albright Knox Art Gallery  is nearly flooded as the banks of Hoyt Lake are beginning to over flow.
Revised:  Delaware Park, located near the Albright Knox Art Gallery , is nearly flooded as the banks of Hoyt Lake are beginning to over flow.
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Original:  We didn't received food until yesterday.
Revised:  We didn't receive food until yesterday.
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Original:  He also pleaded guilty to a contempt charge for violating a court order to stay away from his mother  
Revised:  He also pleaded guilty to a contempt charge for violating a court order to stay away from his mother . 
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Original:  He also pleaded guilty to a contempt charge for violating a court order to stay away from his mother  
Revised:  He also pleaded guilty to a contempt charge for violating a court order to stay away from his mother as asd
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Original: Favreau hit his mother with a novelty bike chain in May after she expressed praise for last years runnerup Katherine McPhee.
Revised: Favreau hit his mother with a novelty bike chain in May after she expressed praise for last year's runner-up Katherine McPhee.
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Original:  She was treated for a cut on her head and was released, Police say.
Revised:  She was treated for a cut on her head and was released, police say.
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Original:  Twenty-five-year-old Cory Favreau of Plattsburgh, New York  pleaded guilty to third-degree assault.
Revised:  Favreau, a twenty-five-year-old native of Plattsburgh, New York pleaded guilty to third-degree assault.
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Original:  Twenty-five-year-old Cory Favreau of Plattsburgh, New York  pleaded guilty to third-degree assault.
Revised:  Twenty-five-year-old Cory Favreau of Plattsburgh, New York , pleaded guilty to third-degree assault.
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Original:  However, the size advantages of the new system may make it particularly suitable for mobile applications, particularly cell phones, wearable computers, and head-mounted displays  
Revised:  However, the size advantages of the new system may make it particularly suitable for mobile applications, particularly cell phones, wearable computers, and head-mounted displays . 
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Original: 250px|Smolarek (behind flag) played for the Polish national team 60 times Former Pakistani international footballer Abdul Ghafoor has died in Karachi at the age of 71.
Revised:  Former Pakistani international footballer Abdul Ghafoor has died in Karachi at the age of 71.
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Original:  He was the captain of the Pakistani national football team for four years in the 1960'   
Revised:  He was the captain of the Pakistani national football team during the 1960' 
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Original: 200px|Ghafoor died in the Pakistani captial of Karachi Former Pakistani international footballer Abdul Ghafoor has died in Karachi at the age of 71.
Revised: 200px|Ghafoor died in the Pakistani captial of Former Pakistani international footballer Abdul Ghafoor has died in Karachi at the age of 71.
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Original: 200px|Ghafoor died in the Pakistani captial of Karachi Former Pakistani international footballer Abdul Ghafoor has died in Karachi at the age of 71.
Revised: 200px|Ghafoor died in the Pakistani captial of Karachi Former Pakistani international footballer has died in Karachi at the age of 71.
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Original:  He was the captain of the Pakistani national football team during the 1960's and 70's.
Revised:  He was the captain of the during the 1960's and 70's.
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Original:  Makhdoom Syed Faisal Saleh Hayat, the President of the Pakistani Football Federation (PFF) released a statement after Ghafoor's death.
Revised:  Makhdoom Syed Faisal Saleh Hayat, the President of the (PFF) released a statement after Ghafoor's death.
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Original:  Ghafoor played his entire career in Pakistan playing for the Dhaka Mohammedan Club .
Revised:  Ghafoor played his entire career in Pakistan playing for the .
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Original:  They are ranked 177th in the FIFA World Ranking
Revised:  They are ranked 177th in th
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Original:  They are ranked 177th in th
Revised:  They are ranked 177th in the
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Original:  He was the captain of the during the 1960's and 70's .
Revised:  He was the captain of the during the 1960s and 70s .
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Original:  The PFF has come under some critism from the Pakistani media about it's lack of support for Ghafoor in his five years of illness.
Revised:  The PFF has come under some criticism from the Pakistani media about it's lack of support for Ghafoor in his five years of illness.
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Original:  They were also sucessful in winning the 1974 Asian Games.
Revised:  They were also successful in winning the 1974 Asian Games.
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Original:  Today Pakistan have very little sucess in internation football.
Revised:  Today Pakistan have very little success in international football.
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Original:  The system will be tested on March 2 and 3.
Revised:  The system will be tested on in the following two days.
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Original:  When it was all said and done, Spain and Great Britain both had a gold and a silver, Brazil and the United States had a gold each, Switzerland had a silver and a bronze, Colombia had a silver, and Tunisia, Australia and Belarus each had a bronze medal  
Revised:  When it was all said and done, Spain and Great Britain both had a gold and a silver, Brazil and the United States had a gold each, Switzerland had a silver and a bronze, Colombia had a silver, and Tunisia, Australia and Belarus each had a bronze medal . 
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Original:  In the women's T54 event, Australian set an Oceania record with a time of 1:49: 37 
Revised:  In the women's T54 event, Australian set an Oceania record with a time of 1:49: 37. 
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Original:  Tatyana McFadden of the United States had a chance at four gold medals in London, but was unable to seriously compete after a pair of tire punctures mid-race that seriously slowed her down  [  
Revised:  Tatyana McFadden of the United States had a chance at four gold medals in London, but was unable to seriously compete after a pair of tire punctures mid-race that seriously slowed her down .[ 
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Original:  Tatyana McFadden of the United States had a chance at four gold medals in London, but was unable to seriously compete after a pair of tire punctures mid-race that seriously slowed her down  [  
Revised:  Tatyana McFadden of the United States had a chance at four gold medals in London, but was unable to seriously compete after a pair of tire punctures mid-race that seriously slowed her down [... 
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Original:  Tatyana McFadden of the United States had a chance at four gold medals in London, but was unable to seriously compete after a pair of tire punctures mid-race that seriously slowed her down  [  
Revised:  Tatyana McFadden of the United States had a chance at four gold medals in London, but was unable to seriously compete after a pair of tire punctures mid-race that seriously slowed her down [ Finishing is the most important thing for me, it makes you a better person. I just wanted to compete and stay strong." 
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Original:  This is the second biggest sports event in the world and they are not here, so it's their loss, they missed a big chance.  
Revised:  This is the second biggest sports event in the world and they are not here, so it's their loss, they missed a big chance. " 
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Original:  It was going to cover topics including the recent divorce of actress from Tom Cruise, the role of minors within the Scientology organization, biographical material on Scientology's chief , and controversy within the elite Scientology group known as the .
Revised:  It was going to cover topics including the recent divorce of actress from Tom Cruise, the role of minors within the Scientology organization, material on Scientology's chief , and controversy within the elite Scientology group known as the .
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Original:  It was going to cover topics including the recent divorce of actress from Tom Cruise, the role of minors within the Scientology organization, biographical material on Scientology's chief , and controversy within the elite Scientology group known as the .
Revised:  It was going to cover topics including the recent divorce of actress from Tom Cruise, the role of minors within the Scientology organization, biographical material on Scientology's chief , and controversy regarding the elite Scientology group known as the .
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