wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  27 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on raping a small child . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was lol . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after raping the Prime Minister .
Revised:  77 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on raping a small child . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was lol . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after raping the Prime Minister .
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Original:  27 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on raping a small child . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was lol . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after raping the Prime Minister .
Revised:  27 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on holiday . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was lol . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after raping the Prime Minister .
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Original:  27 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on raping a small child . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was lol . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after raping the Prime Minister .
Revised:  27 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on raping a small child . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was ill . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after raping the Prime Minister .
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Original:  27 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on raping a small child . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was lol . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after raping the Prime Minister .
Revised:  27 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on raping a small child . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was lol . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after the Prime Minister .
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Original:  Ian Cameron was born with both legs deformed (lol) , and during his life he underwent numerous operations.
Revised:  Ian Cameron was born with both legs deformed , and during his life he underwent numerous operations.
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Original:  To have a disability in the 1930s and 1940sby a kinky whip , a different age, was really tough, but he never let it affect him in any way."
Revised:  To have a disability in the 1930s and 1940s , a different age, was really tough, but he never let it affect him in any way."
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Original:  To have a disability in the 1930s and 1940s, a different age, was really tough, but he never let it affect him in any way."
Revised:  a different age, was really tough, but he never let it affect him in any way."
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Original: BP released their report into the causes causes of the Deepwater Horizon disaster earlier this year on Wednesday, and shifted much of the blame for the explosion and subsequent oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico — the largest accidental marine oil spill in the history of the petroleum industry — onto Transocean, the company managing the rig.
Revised: BP released their report into the causes causes of the Deepwater Horizon disaster earlier this year on Wednesday, and shifted much of the blame for the explosion and subsequent oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico , the largest accidental marine oil spill in the history of the petroleum industry — onto Transocean, the company managing the rig.
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Original: BP released their report into the causes causes of the Deepwater Horizon disaster earlier this year on Wednesday, and shifted much of the blame for the explosion and subsequent oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico — the largest accidental marine oil spill in the history of the petroleum industry — onto Transocean, the company managing the rig.
Revised: BP released their report into the causes causes of the Deepwater Horizon disaster earlier this year on Wednesday, and shifted much of the blame for the explosion and subsequent oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico — the largest accidental marine oil spill in the history of the petroleum industry , onto Transocean, the company managing the rig.
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Original:  The report concludes by stating that decisions made by “ multiple companies and work teams ” contributed to the accident which it says arose from “ a complex and interlinked series of mechanical failures, human judgments, engineering design, operational implementation and team interfaces.
Revised:  The report concludes by stating that decisions made by " multiple companies and work teams ” contributed to the accident which it says arose from “ a complex and interlinked series of mechanical failures, human judgments, engineering design, operational implementation and team interfaces.
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Original:  The report concludes by stating that decisions made by “ multiple companies and work teams ” contributed to the accident which it says arose from “ a complex and interlinked series of mechanical failures, human judgments, engineering design, operational implementation and team interfaces.
Revised:  The report concludes by stating that decisions made by “ multiple companies and work teams " contributed to the accident which it says arose from “ a complex and interlinked series of mechanical failures, human judgments, engineering design, operational implementation and team interfaces.
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Original:  The report concludes by stating that decisions made by “ multiple companies and work teams ” contributed to the accident which it says arose from “ a complex and interlinked series of mechanical failures, human judgments, engineering design, operational implementation and team interfaces.
Revised:  The report concludes by stating that decisions made by “ multiple companies and work teams ” contributed to the accident which it says arose from " a complex and interlinked series of mechanical failures, human judgments, engineering design, operational implementation and team interfaces.
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Original:  ” The report, the product of a four-month investigation conducted by BP's Head of Safety Operations, Mark Bly, criticises the oil rig's fire prevention systems, the crew of the rig for failing to realise and act upon evidence that oil was leaking from the surface of the ocean, and describes how BP and Transocean "incorrectly accepted" negative pressure test results.
Revised:  " The report, the product of a four-month investigation conducted by BP's Head of Safety Operations, Mark Bly, criticises the oil rig's fire prevention systems, the crew of the rig for failing to realise and act upon evidence that oil was leaking from the surface of the ocean, and describes how BP and Transocean "incorrectly accepted" negative pressure test results.
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Original:  ” The report, the product of a four-month investigation conducted by BP's Head of Safety Operations, Mark Bly, criticises the oil rig's fire prevention systems, the crew of the rig for failing to realise and act upon evidence that oil was leaking from the surface of the ocean, and describes how BP and Transocean "incorrectly accepted" negative pressure test results.
Revised:  ” The report, the product of a four-month investigation conducted by BP's Head of Safety Operations, Mark Bly, criticizes the oil rig's fire prevention systems, the crew of the rig for failing to realise and act upon evidence that oil was leaking from the surface of the ocean, and describes how BP and Transocean "incorrectly accepted" negative pressure test results.
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Original:  ” The report, the product of a four-month investigation conducted by BP's Head of Safety Operations, Mark Bly, criticises the oil rig's fire prevention systems, the crew of the rig for failing to realise and act upon evidence that oil was leaking from the surface of the ocean, and describes how BP and Transocean "incorrectly accepted" negative pressure test results.
Revised:  ” The report, the product of a four-month investigation conducted by BP's Head of Safety Operations, Mark Bly, criticises the oil rig's fire prevention systems, the crew of the rig for failing to realize and act upon evidence that oil was leaking from the surface of the ocean, and describes how BP and Transocean "incorrectly accepted" negative pressure test results.
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Original:  He said, “ we have said from the beginning that the explosion on the Deepwater Horizon was a shared responsibility among many entities.
Revised:  He said, " we have said from the beginning that the explosion on the Deepwater Horizon was a shared responsibility among many entities.
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Original:  The report included 25 reccomendations , according to a press release, "designed to prevent a recurrence of such an accident."
Revised:  The report included 25 recommendations , according to a press release, "designed to prevent a recurrence of such an accident."
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Original:  The oil company has previously blamed Transocean and Halliburton — the well contractor — for the disaster , and BP executives feel they have been unfairly blamed by American politicians for the disaster, and the report continues this view.
Revised:  The oil company has previously blamed Transocean and Halliburton , the well contractor — for the disaster , and BP executives feel they have been unfairly blamed by American politicians for the disaster, and the report continues this view.
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Original:  The oil company has previously blamed Transocean and Halliburton — the well contractor — for the disaster , and BP executives feel they have been unfairly blamed by American politicians for the disaster, and the report continues this view.
Revised:  The oil company has previously blamed Transocean and Halliburton — the well contractor , for the disaster , and BP executives feel they have been unfairly blamed by American politicians for the disaster, and the report continues this view.
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Original:  The oil company has previously blamed Transocean and Halliburton — the well contractor — for the disaster , and BP executives feel they have been unfairly blamed by American politicians for the disaster, and the report continues this view.
Revised:  The oil company has previously blamed Transocean and Halliburton — the well contractor — for the disaster and BP executives feel they have been unfairly blamed by American politicians for the disaster, and the report continues this view.
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Original:  The report blames the type of cement used by Halliburton, designed to prevent harmful hydrocarbons from reaching the seabed, as well as criticising the crew of Deepwater Horizon, for failing to realise for forty minutes that oil had started to leak from the well, and once it was realised , the crew "vented" the hydrocarbons "directly onto the rig".
Revised:  The report blames the type of cement used by Halliburton, designed to prevent harmful hydrocarbons from reaching the seabed, as well as criticizing the crew of Deepwater Horizon, for failing to realise for forty minutes that oil had started to leak from the well, and once it was realised , the crew "vented" the hydrocarbons "directly onto the rig".
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Original:  The report blames the type of cement used by Halliburton, designed to prevent harmful hydrocarbons from reaching the seabed, as well as criticising the crew of Deepwater Horizon, for failing to realise for forty minutes that oil had started to leak from the well, and once it was realised , the crew "vented" the hydrocarbons "directly onto the rig".
Revised:  The report blames the type of cement used by Halliburton, designed to prevent harmful hydrocarbons from reaching the seabed, as well as criticising the crew of Deepwater Horizon, for failing to realize for forty minutes that oil had started to leak from the well, and once it was realised , the crew "vented" the hydrocarbons "directly onto the rig".
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Original:  The report blames the type of cement used by Halliburton, designed to prevent harmful hydrocarbons from reaching the seabed, as well as criticising the crew of Deepwater Horizon, for failing to realise for forty minutes that oil had started to leak from the well, and once it was realised , the crew "vented" the hydrocarbons "directly onto the rig".
Revised:  The report blames the type of cement used by Halliburton, designed to prevent harmful hydrocarbons from reaching the seabed, as well as criticising the crew of Deepwater Horizon, for failing to realise for forty minutes that oil had started to leak from the well, and once it was realized , the crew "vented" the hydrocarbons "directly onto the rig".
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Original:  Describing how the explosion, which killed eleven rig personnel, occured , the report states that "the heating, ventilation and air conditioning system probably transferred a gas-rich mixture into the engine rooms," where the hydrocarbons ignited and a fireball engulfed the rig.
Revised:  Describing how the explosion, which killed eleven rig personnel, occurred , the report states that "the heating, ventilation and air conditioning system probably transferred a gas-rich mixture into the engine rooms," where the hydrocarbons ignited and a fireball engulfed the rig.
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Original:  But, the report states, the blowout preventer — the ultimate failsafe on the Deepwater Horizon — failed, likely due to the fire on the rig , and the fact that an automated system was not operational because the batteries powering it, located in a control pod, had gone flat, and another control pod contained a faulty solenoid valve.
Revised:  But, the report states, the blowout preventer , the ultimate failsafe on the Deepwater Horizon — failed, likely due to the fire on the rig , and the fact that an automated system was not operational because the batteries powering it, located in a control pod, had gone flat, and another control pod contained a faulty solenoid valve.
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Original:  But, the report states, the blowout preventer — the ultimate failsafe on the Deepwater Horizon — failed, likely due to the fire on the rig , and the fact that an automated system was not operational because the batteries powering it, located in a control pod, had gone flat, and another control pod contained a faulty solenoid valve.
Revised:  But, the report states, the blowout preventer — the ultimate failsafe on the Deepwater Horizon failed, likely due to the fire on the rig , and the fact that an automated system was not operational because the batteries powering it, located in a control pod, had gone flat, and another control pod contained a faulty solenoid valve.
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Original:  But, the report states, the blowout preventer — the ultimate failsafe on the Deepwater Horizon — failed, likely due to the fire on the rig , and the fact that an automated system was not operational because the batteries powering it, located in a control pod, had gone flat, and another control pod contained a faulty solenoid valve.
Revised:  But, the report states, the blowout preventer — the ultimate failsafe on the Deepwater Horizon — failed, likely due to the fire on the rig . An automated system was not operational because the batteries powering it, located in a control pod, had gone flat, and another control pod contained a faulty solenoid valve.
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Original:  The executive summary is four and a half pages long — and the first page is made up entirely of legal disclaimers — if BP was found to be negligent in their operations of the rig, they could be find a good deal more.
Revised:  The executive summary is four and a half pages long and the first page is made up entirely of legal disclaimers — if BP was found to be negligent in their operations of the rig, they could be find a good deal more.
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Original:  The executive summary is four and a half pages long — and the first page is made up entirely of legal disclaimers — if BP was found to be negligent in their operations of the rig, they could be find a good deal more.
Revised:  The executive summary is four and a half pages long — and the first page is made up entirely of legal disclaimers saying if BP was found to be negligent in their operations of the rig, they could be find a good deal more.
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Original:  The executive summary is four and a half pages long — and the first page is made up entirely of legal disclaimers — if BP was found to be negligent in their operations of the rig, they could be find a good deal more.
Revised:  The executive summary is four and a half pages long — and the first page is made up entirely of legal disclaimers — if BP was found to be negligent in their operations of the rig, they could be fined a good deal more.
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Original:  Ed Markey, the Massachusetts Democrat who has been investigating the spill in Congress, said that he felt the report was simply a lengthy defense of the oil company's handling of teh spill.
Revised:  Ed Markey, the Massachusetts democrat who has been investigating the spill in Congress, said that he felt the report was simply a lengthy defense of the oil company's handling of teh spill.
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Original:  Ed Markey, the Massachusetts Democrat who has been investigating the spill in Congress, said that he felt the report was simply a lengthy defense of the oil company's handling of teh spill.
Revised:  Ed Markey, the Massachusetts Democrat who has been investigating the spill in Congress, said that he felt the report was simply a lengthy defense of the oil company's handling of the spill.
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Original:  Bly acknowledged in a press conference in Washington that the report did not detail the charges raised against the company in Congress — that BP permitted a culture of recklessness to flourish.
Revised:  Bly acknowledged during a press conference in Washington that the report did not detail the charges raised against the company in Congress — that BP permitted a culture of recklessness to flourish.
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Original:  Bly acknowledged in a press conference in Washington that the report did not detail the charges raised against the company in Congress — that BP permitted a culture of recklessness to flourish.
Revised:  Bly acknowledged in a press conference in Washington that the report did not detail the charges raised against the company in Congress and that BP permitted a culture of recklessness to flourish.
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Original:  Wayne Pennington, head of the geological engineering department at Michigan Technical University, also alleged that BP was wrong to blame other parties involved with the disaser . "The blowout and subsequent explosion and spillage appear to the result of an overall attitude that encouraged unwarranted optimism in the quality of each component of the job, allowing the omission of standard testing procedures, and the misinterpretation of other tests in the most-favorable light."
Revised:  Wayne Pennington, head of the geological engineering department at Michigan Technical University, also alleged that BP was wrong to blame other parties involved with the disaster . "The blowout and subsequent explosion and spillage appear to the result of an overall attitude that encouraged unwarranted optimism in the quality of each component of the job, allowing the omission of standard testing procedures, and the misinterpretation of other tests in the most-favorable light."
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Original:  “ We have sought throughout to step up to our responsibilities.
Revised:  " We have sought throughout to step up to our responsibilities.
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Original:  The executive summary is four and a half pages long—and the first page is made up entirely of legal disclaimers—if BP was found to be negligent in their operations of the rig, they could be find a good deal more.]]
Revised:  The executive summary is four and a half pages long—and the first page is made up entirely of legal disclaimers—if BP was found to be negligent in their operations of the rig, they could be fined a good deal more.]]
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Original: BP released their report into the causes causes of the Deepwater Horizon disaster earlier this year on Wednesday, and shifted much of the blame for the explosion and subsequent oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico, the largest accidental marine oil spill in the history of the petroleum industry, onto Transocean, the company managing the rig.
Revised: BP released their report into the causes of the Deepwater Horizon disaster earlier this year on Wednesday, and shifted much of the blame for the explosion and subsequent oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico, the largest accidental marine oil spill in the history of the petroleum industry, onto Transocean, the company managing the rig.
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Original:  There was a projection of historical images , that also contained a message from the trapped miners in Copiapó.
Revised:  There was a projection of historical images that also contained a message from the trapped miners in Copiapó.
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Original:  Celebrations of the Bicentennial in Pichilemu started earlier this month , when on September 2, two thousand people lined up in a formation to form the message "Viva Chile Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" with their bodies on Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas" , to create a postal stamp to be released worldwide.
Revised:  Celebrations of the Bicentennial in Pichilemu started earlier this month . On September 2, two thousand people lined up in a formation to form the message "Viva Chile Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" with their bodies on Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas" , to create a postal stamp to be released worldwide.
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Original:  Celebrations of the Bicentennial in Pichilemu started earlier this month , when on September 2, two thousand people lined up in a formation to form the message "Viva Chile Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" with their bodies on Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas" , to create a postal stamp to be released worldwide.
Revised:  Celebrations of the Bicentennial in Pichilemu started earlier this month , when on September 2, two thousand people lined up in a formation to create the message "Viva Chile Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" with their bodies on Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas" , to create a postal stamp to be released worldwide.
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Original:  Celebrations of the Bicentennial in Pichilemu started earlier this month , when on September 2, two thousand people lined up in a formation to form the message "Viva Chile Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" with their bodies on Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas" , to create a postal stamp to be released worldwide.
Revised:  Celebrations of the Bicentennial in Pichilemu started earlier this month , when on September 2, two thousand people lined up in a formation to form the message "Viva Chile Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" on Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas" , to create a postal stamp to be released worldwide.
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Original:  Celebrations of the Bicentennial in Pichilemu started earlier this month , when on September 2, two thousand people lined up in a formation to form the message "Viva Chile Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" with their bodies on Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas" , to create a postal stamp to be released worldwide.
Revised:  Celebrations of the Bicentennial in Pichilemu started earlier this month , when on September 2, two thousand people lined up in a formation to form the message "Viva Chile Bicentenario Cardenal Caro" with their bodies on Pichilemu beach "Las Terrazas" . The message was used to create a postal stamp to be released worldwide.
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Original:  Private schools in the city, such as Colegio Preciosa Sangre  prepared events specially for their students.
Revised:  Private schools in the city, such as Colegio Preciosa Sangre , prepared events specially for their students.
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