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Original:  edition Based on new communications practices  the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration  a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet  while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together  as did the web 1.0  it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
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Original:  edition Based on new communications practices  the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration  a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet  while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together  as did the web 1.0  it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
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Original:  edition Based on new communications practices  the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration  a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet  while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together  as did the web 1.0  it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
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Original:  edition Based on new communications practices  the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration  a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet  while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together  as did the web 1.0  it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
Revised:  edition Based on new communications practices the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet , while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together as did the web 1.0 it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
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Original:  edition Based on new communications practices  the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration  a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet  while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together  as did the web 1.0  it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
Revised:  edition Based on new communications practices the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet while also enriching reading through collective reading practices . The web 2.0 not only links documents together as did the web 1.0 it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
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Original:  edition Based on new communications practices  the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration  a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet  while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together  as did the web 1.0  it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
Revised:  edition Based on new communications practices the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together , as did the web 1.0 it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
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Original:  edition Based on new communications practices  the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration  a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet  while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together  as did the web 1.0  it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
Revised:  edition Based on new communications practices the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together as did the web 1.0 , it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
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Original:  edition Based on new communications practices  the web 2.0 and the new architecture participation online edition opens the door to a collaboration  a community to elaborate and improve contents on Internet  while also enriching reading through collective reading practices the web 2.0 not only links documents together  as did the web 1.0  it also links people together through social mediathat 's why it's called theWeb 2.0participative or participatoryWebcite URL 2.0 Revolution:
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Original:  2018 Many tools were put in place to foster sharing and creative collective contents one the many is the Wikipedia encyclopedia,
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Original:  since it is edited  corrected and enhanced by millions contributorsopenStreetMapopen street Map is also based on the same principle blogs and comment systems are also now renown as online edition and publishing,
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Original:  since it is edited  corrected and enhanced by millions contributorsopenStreetMapopen street Map is also based on the same principle blogs and comment systems are also now renown as online edition and publishing,
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Original:  since it is edited  corrected and enhanced by millions contributorsopenStreetMapopen street Map is also based on the same principle blogs and comment systems are also now renown as online edition and publishing,
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Original:  since it is possible through new interactions between the author and its readers  and can be an important method for inspiration but also for visibility. ref>cite URL lédition numérique et le livre numériquewebsite=mediadix.parisnanterre.frlanguage=fraccess-date=July 13, 2018process  The electronic publishing process follows some aspectsthe traditional paperbased publishing URL stylechapterbut differs from traditional publishing in two ways:
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Original:  and users can read the material on a range  electronic and digital devices  including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website  in an application on a tablet device  or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
Revised:  and users can read the material on a range of electronic and digital devices including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website in an application on a tablet device or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
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Revised:  and users can read the material on a range electronic and digital devices including desktop computers , laptops, tablet computers, smartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website in an application on a tablet device or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
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Revised:  and users can read the material on a range electronic and digital devices including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets . The consumer may read the published content online a website in an application on a tablet device or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
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Revised:  and users can read the material on a range electronic and digital devices including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website , in an application on a tablet device or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
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Original:  and users can read the material on a range  electronic and digital devices  including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website  in an application on a tablet device  or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
Revised:  and users can read the material on a range electronic and digital devices including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website in an application on a tablet device , or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
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Original:  and users can read the material on a range  electronic and digital devices  including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website  in an application on a tablet device  or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
Revised:  and users can read the material on a range electronic and digital devices including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website in an application on a tablet device or in a PDF document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
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Original:  and users can read the material on a range  electronic and digital devices  including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website  in an application on a tablet device  or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
Revised:  and users can read the material on a range electronic and digital devices including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website in an application on a tablet device or in a pdf document on a computer . In some cases, the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
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Original:  and users can read the material on a range  electronic and digital devices  including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website  in an application on a tablet device  or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
Revised:  and users can read the material on a range electronic and digital devices including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website in an application on a tablet device or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumer-grade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
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Original:  and users can read the material on a range  electronic and digital devices  including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website  in an application on a tablet device  or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
Revised:  and users can read the material on a range electronic and digital devices including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website in an application on a tablet device or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via a print on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
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Original:  and users can read the material on a range  electronic and digital devices  including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website  in an application on a tablet device  or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system some users download digital content to their devices,
Revised:  and users can read the material on a range electronic and digital devices including desktop computers laptopstablet computerssmartphones or e-reader tablets the consumer may read the published content online a website in an application on a tablet device or in a pdf document on a computer in some cases the reader may print the content onto paper using a consumergrade ink-jet or laser printer or via aprint on demand system . Some users download digital content to their devices,
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