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Original:  Famous people include current BBC Radio 2 breakfast show disc jockey Sir Terry Wogan, BBC Radio 1 breakfast show DJ Chris Moyles  and Alan Davies, who has a starring role in BBC One drama Jonathan Creek
Revised:  Famous people include current BBC Radio 2 breakfast show disc jockey Sir Terry Wogan, BBC Radio 1 breakfast show DJ Chris Moyles , and Alan Davies, who has a starring role in BBC One drama Jonathan Creek
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Original:  Famous people include current BBC Radio 2 breakfast show disc jockey Sir Terry Wogan, BBC Radio 1 breakfast show DJ Chris Moyles  and Alan Davies, who has a starring role in BBC One drama Jonathan Creek
Revised:  Famous people include current BBC Radio 2 breakfast show disc jockey Sir Terry Wogan, BBC Radio 1 breakfast show DJ Chris Moyles and Alan Davies, star of BBC One drama Jonathan Creek
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Original:  The Election Complaints Commission (ECC) had ordered votes to be recounted at polling stations where one of the candidates received a very high percentage of votes, or where voter turnout was over six hundred.
Revised:  The Election Complaints Commission (ECC) had ordered votes to be recounted at polling stations where one of the candidates received a very high percentage of votes, or where voter turnout was over 600.
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Original:  Piquet sr is a three-times former world champion.
Revised:  Piquet Sr. is a three-times former world champion.
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Original:  Piquet jr crashed in the 2008 Singapore Grand Prix just after an early pit stop for Fernando Alonso, bringing out the safety car.
Revised:  Piquet Jr. crashed in the 2008 Singapore Grand Prix just after an early pit stop for Fernando Alonso, bringing out the safety car.
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Original:  "I was asked by Mr Flavio Briatore and [engineer] Mr Pat Symonds to deliberately crash my car in order to positively influence the performance of the Team at the event," said Piquet jr . 'I agreed to this proposal and caused my car to hit a wall and crash during lap 13/14 of the race."
Revised:  "I was asked by Mr Flavio Briatore and [engineer] Mr Pat Symonds to deliberately crash my car in order to positively influence the performance of the Team at the event," said Piquet Jr . 'I agreed to this proposal and caused my car to hit a wall and crash during lap 13/14 of the race."
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Original: Renault F1 have hit back at their sacked driver Nelson Piquet jr after a leaked transcript of his evidence to the sport's governing body revealed he claimed to have been ordered to crash to fix a race.
Revised: Renault F1 have hit back at their sacked driver Nelson Piquet Jr. after a leaked transcript of his evidence to the sport's governing body revealed he claimed to have been ordered to crash to fix a race.
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Original:  Renault now have to appear before the FIA on September 21 to answer a race-fixing charge, but have made a complain to the French police against Piquet and his father Nelson Piquet sr , claiming blackmail and false allegations.
Revised:  Renault now have to appear before the FIA on September 21 to answer a race-fixing charge, but have made a complain to the French police against Piquet and his father Nelson Piquet Sr. , claiming blackmail and false allegations.
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Original:  "'Renault F1 Team and its managing director Flavio Briatore have commenced criminal proceedings against Nelson Piquet Jr and Nelson Piquet Sr  concerning the making of false allegations and a related attempt to blackmail the team into allowing Piquet Jr to drive for the remainder of the 2009 season.
Revised:  "'Renault F1 Team and its managing director Flavio Briatore have commenced criminal proceedings against Nelson Piquet Jr and Nelson Piquet Sr . concerning the making of false allegations and a related attempt to blackmail the team into allowing Piquet Jr to drive for the remainder of the 2009 season.
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Original: Renault now have to appear before the FIA on September 21 to answer a race-fixing charge , but have made a complain to the French police against Piquet and his father Nelson Piquet Sr., claiming blackmail and false allegations.
Revised: Renault now has to appear before the FIA on September 21 to answer a race-fixing charge , but have made a complain to the French police against Piquet and his father Nelson Piquet Sr., claiming blackmail and false allegations.
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Original: Renault now have to appear before the FIA on September 21 to answer a race-fixing charge , but have made a complain to the French police against Piquet and his father Nelson Piquet Sr., claiming blackmail and false allegations.
Revised: Renault now have to appear before the FIA on September 21 to answer a race-fixing charge . They have also made a complaint to the French police against Piquet and his father Nelson Piquet Sr., claiming blackmail and false allegations.
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Original:  " ' Renault F1 Team and its managing director Flavio Briatore have commenced criminal proceedings against Nelson Piquet Jr and Nelson Piquet Sr. concerning the making of false allegations and a related attempt to blackmail the team into allowing Piquet Jr to drive for the remainder of the 2009 season.
Revised:  " Renault F1 Team and its managing director Flavio Briatore have commenced criminal proceedings against Nelson Piquet Jr and Nelson Piquet Sr. concerning the making of false allegations and a related attempt to blackmail the team into allowing Piquet Jr to drive for the remainder of the 2009 season.
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Original:  Piquet jr was sacked after the 2009 Hungarian Grand Prix.
Revised:  Piquet Jr was sacked after the 2009 Hungarian Grand Prix.
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Original:  "I was asked by Mr Flavio Briatore and [engineer] Mr Pat Symonds to deliberately crash my car in order to positively influence the performance of the Team at the event," said Piquet Jr. ' I agreed to this proposal and caused my car to hit a wall and crash during lap 13/14 of the race."
Revised:  "I was asked by Mr Flavio Briatore and [engineer] Mr Pat Symonds to deliberately crash my car in order to positively influence the performance of the Team at the event," said Piquet Jr. " I agreed to this proposal and caused my car to hit a wall and crash during lap 13/14 of the race."
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Original:  He added " ' At the time of this conversation, I was in a very fragile and emotional state of mind - brought about by intense stress due to the fact that Mr Briatore had refused to inform me of whether or not my contract would be renewed for the next racing year.
Revised:  He added " At the time of this conversation, I was in a very fragile and emotional state of mind - brought about by intense stress due to the fact that Mr Briatore had refused to inform me of whether or not my contract would be renewed for the next racing year.
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Original:  "Renault F1 Team and its managing director Flavio Briatore have commenced criminal proceedings against Nelson Piquet Jr  and Nelson Piquet Sr. concerning the making of false allegations and a related attempt to blackmail the team into allowing Piquet Jr  to drive for the remainder of the 2009 season.
Revised:  "Renault F1 Team and its managing director Flavio Briatore have commenced criminal proceedings against Nelson Piquet Jr . and Nelson Piquet Sr. concerning the making of false allegations and a related attempt to blackmail the team into allowing Piquet Jr to drive for the remainder of the 2009 season.
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Original:  "Renault F1 Team and its managing director Flavio Briatore have commenced criminal proceedings against Nelson Piquet Jr  and Nelson Piquet Sr. concerning the making of false allegations and a related attempt to blackmail the team into allowing Piquet Jr  to drive for the remainder of the 2009 season.
Revised:  "Renault F1 Team and its managing director Flavio Briatore have commenced criminal proceedings against Nelson Piquet Jr and Nelson Piquet Sr. concerning the making of false allegations and a related attempt to blackmail the team into allowing Piquet Jr . to drive for the remainder of the 2009 season.
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Original:  "I was asked by Mr Flavio Briatore and [engineer] Mr  Pat Symonds to deliberately crash my car in order to positively influence the performance of the Team at the event," said Piquet Jr. "I agreed to this proposal and caused my car to hit a wall and crash during lap 13/14 of the race."
Revised:  "I was asked by Mr Flavio Briatore and [engineer] Mr . Pat Symonds to deliberately crash my car in order to positively influence the performance of the Team at the event," said Piquet Jr. "I agreed to this proposal and caused my car to hit a wall and crash during lap 13/14 of the race."
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Original:  Piquet Jr  was sacked after the 2009 Hungarian Grand Prix.
Revised:  Piquet Jr . was sacked after the 2009 Hungarian Grand Prix.
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Original:  The checkpoint post was completely destroyed, he said   .
Revised:  The checkpoint post was completely destroyed, he said . .
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Original:  Officials with the Florida Fish and Wildlife Conservation Commission visited the home after a complaint arose questioning the security of the snake's chain-link cage   
Revised:  Officials with the Florida Fish and Wildlife Conservation Commission visited the home after a complaint arose questioning the security of the snake's chain-link cage . 
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Original:  Melvin Cheever was caring for Delilah after his brother moved to West Virginia and left the snake behind temporarily to prepare a new home for her . Officials with the Florida Fish and Wildlife Conservation Commission visited the home after a complaint arose questioning the security of the snake's chain-link cage.
Revised:  Melvin Cheever was caring for Delilah after his brother moved to West Virginia and left the snake behind temporarily . Officials with the Florida Fish and Wildlife Conservation Commission visited the home after a complaint arose questioning the security of the snake's chain-link cage.
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Original:  It's a monster of a snake.  
Revised:  It's a monster of a snake. " 
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Original:  It's a monster of a snake.  
Revised:  It's a monster of a snake. The incident occurs amid fears of snakes following the death of a 2-year-old Sumter County girl who was killed by her family's pet python earlier this summer
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Original: JPG| 300| The Burmese python is the largest subspecies of the Indian Python.
Revised: JPG| The Burmese python is the largest subspecies of the Indian Python.
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Original:  He made the announcement at the IBC | 2009 conference in Amsterdam, Netherlands.
Revised:  He made the announcement at the IBC 2009 conference in Amsterdam, Netherlands.
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Original:  Sixty people were arrested as a result of that incident . Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:Euro
Revised:  Sixty people were arrested as a result of that incident Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:Euro
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Original:  Sixty people were arrested as a result of that incident . Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:Euro
Revised:  Sixty people were arrested as a result of that incident . 
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Original: The riots come after a demonstration against a rally held by the far-right National Democratic Party (NPD).
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Original:  The police deployed water cannons against the  demonstrators, who were throwing stones and other objects in the neighbourhood of Schanzenviertel.
Revised:  2,000 officers were deployed to help contain the riots. They deployed water cannons against the demonstrators, who were throwing stones and other objects in the neighbourhood of Schanzenviertel.
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Original:   Senior police official Peter Born said 28 police officers were wounded in the clashes . 2,000 officers were deployed to help contain the riots.
Revised:  Senior police official Peter Born said 28 police officers were wounded in the clashes 2,000 officers were deployed to help contain the riots.
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Original:   Senior police official Peter Born said 28 police officers were wounded in the clashes . 2,000 officers were deployed to help contain the riots.
Revised:  Senior police official Peter Born said 28 police officers were wounded in the clashes . 
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Original:  Several cars were set on fire and the demonstrators destroyed a bus stop .
Revised:  Several cars were set on fire and the demonstrators destroyed a bus stop 
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Original:  The riots come after clashes between a rally held by the far-right National Democratic Party (NPD) and a counter-demonstration by left-wing groups .
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Original: Location of Hamburg within Germany Local police reports say that 47 people were injured and 60 arrested in Hamburg, Germany, following violence between police and protestors over the past two days.
Revised: Location of Hamburg within Germany Local police reports say that 47 people were injured and 60 arrested in Hamburg, Germany, following violence between police and protesters over the past two days.
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Original:  The demonstrators, protesting a rally held by about 100 members of the far-right National Democratic Party, had been throwing stones and other objects in the neighbourhood of Schanzenviertel.
Revised:  The demonstrators, protesting a rally held by about 100 members of the far-right National Democratic Party, had been throwing stones and other objects in the neighborhood of Schanzenviertel.
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Original: A fire at a drug treatment hospital near Almaty, Kazakhstan , killed it least 38 people on Saturday, authorities have said.
Revised: A fire at a drug treatment hospital near Almaty, Kazakhstan killed at least 38 people on Saturday, authorities have said.
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Original:  Ten more people have been hospitalised , two of them in critical condition.
Revised:  Ten more people have been hospitalized , two of them in critical condition.
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Original:  The fire spread quickly, consuming almost 650 square metres of land.
Revised:  The fire spread quickly, consuming almost 650 square meters of land.
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Original:  "According to tentative data, 38 people were killed, of which 36 were patients and two were medical personnel," the national emergency situation ministry stated.
Revised:  "According to tentative data, 38 people were killed, of which 36 were patients and two were medical personnel," the National Emergency Situation Ministry stated.
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Original:  The disabled veterans were gathering and chatting in the hospital's courtyard ready for the iftar (Futuru), or breaking the dawn-to-dusk fast observed during the holy Muslim month of Ramadan, when the shells fell, according to the Associated Free Press.
Revised:  The disabled veterans were gathering and chatting in the hospital's courtyard ready for the iftar (Futuru), the feast that breaks the dawn-to-dusk fast observed during the holy Muslim month of Ramadan, when the shells fell, according to the Associated Free Press.
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Original:  In fact, parts of the country like Somaliland in the north have claimed de-facto independence in the absence of a central government capable of protecting all parts of the country .
Revised:  Parts of the country like Somaliland in the north have claimed de-facto independence in the absence of a central government capable of protecting all parts of the country .
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Original: In lower grades, Traralgon beat/lost to Moe in the Reserves.
Revised: In lower grades, Traralgon lost to Moe in the Reserves.
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Original: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final 250px|Warragul (player in White and Teal) slipped past Maffra (players in Black and Red) by a point in the Under 18's Major Semi Final Traralgon [have defeated/were defeated by] Maffra in the West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Grand Final at the Recreation Reserve in Morwell, Australia.
Revised: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final 250px|Warragul (player in White and Teal) lost to Maffra (players in Black and Red) by a point in the Under 18's Major Semi Final Traralgon [have defeated/were defeated by] Maffra in the West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Grand Final at the Recreation Reserve in Morwell, Australia.
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Original: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final 250px|Warragul (player in White and Teal) slipped past Maffra (players in Black and Red) by a point in the Under 18's Major Semi Final Traralgon [have defeated/were defeated by] Maffra in the West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Grand Final at the Recreation Reserve in Morwell, Australia.
Revised: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final 250px|Warragul (player in White and Teal) slipped past Maffra (players in Black and Red) in the Under 18's Major Semi Final Traralgon [have defeated/were defeated by] Maffra in the West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Grand Final at the Recreation Reserve in Morwell, Australia.
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Original: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final 250px|Warragul (player in White and Teal) slipped past Maffra (players in Black and Red) by a point in the Under 18's Major Semi Final Traralgon [have defeated/were defeated by] Maffra in the West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Grand Final at the Recreation Reserve in Morwell, Australia.
Revised: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final 250px|Warragul (player in White and Teal) slipped past Maffra (players in Black and Red) by a point in the Under 18's Traralgon [have defeated/were defeated by] Maffra in the West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Grand Final at the Recreation Reserve in Morwell, Australia.
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Original: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final 250px|Warragul (player in White and Teal) lost to Maffra (players in Black and Red) in the Under 18's Traralgon have defeated/ were defeated by Maffra in the West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Grand Final at the Recreation Reserve in Morwell, Australia.
Revised: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final 250px|Warragul (player in White and Teal) lost to Maffra (players in Black and Red) in the Under 18's Traralgon were defeated by Maffra in the West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Grand Final at the Recreation Reserve in Morwell, Australia.
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Original: Traralgon coash Steve Hazelman said, "We now know we can beat anyone, anywhere, it's just a matter of performance and hopefully everyone can step up.
Revised: Traralgon coach Steve Hazelman said, "We now know we can beat anyone, anywhere, it's just a matter of performance and hopefully everyone can step up.
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Original:  Kjell Ingolf Ropstad, one of the politicans who passed the message on, refused to apologize for doing it.
Revised:  Kjell Ingolf Ropstad, one of the politicians who passed the message on, refused to apologize for doing it.
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Original: A viral election joke is landing several Norwegian politicians in hot water as Norway goes to the polls to elect its parliament Monday .
Revised: A viral election joke has landing several politicians in hot water as Norway goes to the polls to elect its parliament Monday .
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Original:  "Due to full polling stations, Progress Party voters should send their vote by SMS with shortcode FRP to 2009" That message, and variations of it, was the joke circulating in social media such as Facebook and Twitter or by SMS mobile phone messages.
Revised:  "Due to full polling stations, Progress Party voters should send their vote by SMS with shortcode FRP to 2009" That message, and variations of it, was the joke circulating in social media such as Facebook and Twitter or by mobile phone messages.
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Original: A viral election joke has landing several politicians in hot water as Norway goes to the polls to elect its parliament today.
Revised: A viral election joke has landed several politicians in hot water as Norway goes to the polls to elect its parliament today.
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Original: The three men had been accused of plotting to destroy several transatlantic passengers jets headed for Northern America by smuggling liquid explosives disguised as soft drinks onto the plane.
Revised: The three men had been accused of plotting to destroy several transatlantic passengers jets headed for North America by smuggling liquid explosives disguised as soft drinks onto the plane.
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Original: Three men, convicted of plotting to blow up three transatlatic passenger jets, were sentenced and sent to jail on Monday.
Revised: Three men, convicted of plotting to blow up three transatlantic passenger jets, were sentenced and sent to jail on Monday.
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Original:  Assad Sarwar, 29, received a sentence of at east 36 years and Tanvir Hussain, 28, 32 years.
Revised:  Assad Sarwar, 29, received a sentence of at least 36 years and Tanvir Hussain, 28, 32 years.
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Original:  An image created by the US Transportation Security Administration showing the flights that were targeted by the bombers in the aircraft bombing plot The trio's ringleader, Abdulla Ahmed Al, 28, received a minimum of 40 years in prison.
Revised:  The trio's ringleader, Abdulla Ahmed Al, 28, received a minimum of 40 years in prison.
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Original:  The targeted planes were all departing from the Heathrow airport in London, bound for locations such as Chicago, Illinois, New York, New York, Toronto, Ontario and Montreal, Quebec.
Revised:  The targeted planes were all departing from the Heathrow Airport in London, bound for locations such as Chicago, Illinois, New York, New York, Toronto, Ontario and Montreal, Quebec.
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Original:  Assad Sarwar, 29, received a sentence of at least 36 years and Tanvir Hussain, 28,  32 years.
Revised:  Assad Sarwar, 29, received a sentence of at least 36 years and Tanvir Hussain, 28, at least 32 years.
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Original:  The targeted planes were all departing from the Heathrow Airport in London, bound for locations such as Chicago, Illinois, New York, New York, Toronto, Ontario  and Montreal, Quebec.
Revised:  The targeted planes were all departing from the Heathrow Airport in London, bound for locations such as Chicago, Illinois, New York, New York, Toronto, Ontario , and Montreal, Quebec.
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Original:  Earlier, police had found bloody clothes in the ceiling, which they think belonged to the killer   
Revised:  Earlier, police had found bloody clothes in the ceiling, which they think belonged to the killer . 
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Original:  Investigators reviewed footage from the 75 security cameras of 10 Amistad, the building where Le last entered, and found no evidence that she had left.
Revised:  Investigators reviewed footage from the security cameras of 10 Amistad, the building where Le last entered, and found no evidence that she had left.
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Original: File:Yale Campus from SSS roof.jpg|Yale University in New Haven, Connecticut , USA ]] A graduate student attending Yale University who went missing five days before her planned wedding was found dead on Sunday, police said.
Revised: File:Yale Campus from SSS roof.jpg|Yale University in New Haven, Connecticut ]] A graduate student attending Yale University who went missing five days before her planned wedding was found dead on Sunday, police said.
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Original:  Annie Le, a doctoral student seeking a degree in medicine, went missing on September 8th , five days before her planned wedding.
Revised:  Annie Le, a doctoral student seeking a degree in medicine, went missing on September 8 , five days before her planned wedding.
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Original:  No arrests have been made in connections with the homicide, according to a police spokesman.
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