wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  In order to specifically investigate effects of food source and host species on bacterial communities, we analyzed samples from wild Drosophila melanogaster and D. simulans flies collected from a variety of natural substrates, as well as from adults and larvae of nine laboratory-reared Drosophila species.
Revised:  In order to specifically investigate effects of food source and host species on bacterial communities, we analyzed samples from wild Drosophila melanogaster and D. simulans collected from a variety of natural substrates, as well as from adults and larvae of nine laboratory-reared Drosophila species.
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Original:  In order to specifically investigate effects of food source and host species on bacterial communities, we analyzed samples from wild Drosophila melanogaster and D. simulans flies collected from a variety of natural substrates, as well as from adults and larvae of nine laboratory-reared Drosophila species.
Revised:  In order to specifically investigate effects of food source and host species on bacterial communities, we analyzed samples from wild Drosophila melanogaster and D. simulans flies collected from a variety of natural substrates, as well as from adults and larvae of nine laboratory reared Drosophila species.
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Original:  As highlighted by numerous clinical evidences, synchronizing steps with external cues induces beneficial effects on gait recovery in several neurological disorders.
Revised:  As highlighted by numerous clinical evidences, synchronizing steps with external cues induces beneficial effects on gait recovery in neurological disorders.
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Original:  In healthy individuals, combining Rhythmic Auditory Cueing (RAC) and treadmill walking has been shown to substantially modify stride-to-stride fluctuation pattern, suggesting the activation of specific auditory-motor processes.
Revised:  The activation of specific auditory-motor processes.
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Original:  Both short-term and long-term  LDS were computed.
Revised:  Both short-term and long-term and short-term LDS were computed.
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Original:  Results. Short-term LDS exhibited a trend to be slightly improved by RAC. Long-term LDS was strongly enhanced . Discussion The results contradict the dual-tasks paradigm that postulates a gait stability decrease when performing a secondary task.
Revised:  Long-term LDS was strongly enhanced . Discussion The results contradict the dual-tasks paradigm that postulates a gait stability decrease when performing a secondary task.
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Original:  The uncoating of the  Influenza virus is dependent on pH changes within the endosome, knock-down of these genes may changes in the endosomal pH inhibiting the uncoating of the virus .
Revised:  The uncoating of the Influenza virus life cycle is further detailed in this paper .
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Original:  From nearby solar flares to distant GRBs , a variety of physical processes accelerate charged particles in a wide energy range , which subsequently reach the Earth.
Revised:  From nearby solar flares to distant gamma ray bursts , a variety of physical processes accelerate charged particles in a wide energy range , which subsequently reach the Earth.
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Original:  From nearby solar flares to distant GRBs , a variety of physical processes accelerate charged particles in a wide energy range , which subsequently reach the Earth.
Revised:  From nearby solar flares to distant GRBs , a variety of physical processes accelerate charged particles to a wide range of energies , which subsequently reach the Earth.
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Original:  Such particles interact with, and contribute to a number of physical processes occurring in the Earth system.
Revised:  Such particles contribute to a number of physical processes occurring in the Earth system.
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Original:  A large fraction of the energy of charged particles gets deposited in the atmosphere, ionizing the atmosphere, causing changes in atmospheric chemistry and affecting the global electric circuit.
Revised:  A large fraction of the energy of charged particles gets deposited in the atmosphere, ionizing the atmosphere, causing changes in its chemistry and affecting the global electric circuit.
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Original:  Life has evolved since past ~ 3 billion years in presence of this background radiation, which itself has varied considerably during the period 1-3 . As demonstrated by the Miller-Urey experiment, lightning plays a very important role in the formation of complex organic molecules, which are the building blocks of more complex structures forming life.
Revised:  Life has evolved over the past ~ 3 billion years in presence of this background radiation, which itself has varied considerably during the period 1-3 . As demonstrated by the Miller-Urey experiment, lightning plays a very important role in the formation of complex organic molecules, which are the building blocks of more complex structures forming life.
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Original:  Life has evolved since past ~ 3 billion years in presence of this background radiation, which itself has varied considerably during the period 1-3 . As demonstrated by the Miller-Urey experiment, lightning plays a very important role in the formation of complex organic molecules, which are the building blocks of more complex structures forming life.
Revised:  Life has evolved since past ~ 3 billion years in presence of this background radiation, which itself has varied considerably during the period . As demonstrated by the Miller-Urey experiment, lightning plays a very important role in the formation of complex organic molecules, which are the building blocks of more complex structures forming life.
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Original:  Age-dependence limits the evolution of male traits to cases of relatively weak selection against the trait, but the traitfixes at smaller sizes when age-dependent than when age-independent.
Revised:  I asked if age-dependent than when age-independent.
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Original:  My results suggest that high adult male survival facilitates sexual selection by favoring the evolution of age-dependent sexual signals under fairly broad conditions .
Revised:  My results suggest that high adult male survival facilitates sexual selection by favoring the evolution of age-dependent sexual signals under weak selection .
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Original: Sexual selection theory has considered the evolution of sexual signals and preferences largely with simplified life historiesand growth trajectories.
Revised: Sexual selection theory models evolution of sexual signals and preferences largely with simplified life historiesand growth trajectories.
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Original:  Traits that must start small and require time and energy to grow may suffer from strong viability selection early in life with little benefit derived from mate choice .
Revised:  Traits that must start small and require time and energy to grow may suffer from strong viability selection and gain little benefit from mate choice .
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Original:  I used numerical population genetic simulations to analyze evolution of preferences, condition and age-dependent traits in an age-structured haploid population with no genetic drift.
Revised:  I used numerical simulations to analyze evolution of preferences, condition and age-dependent traits in an age-structured haploid population with no genetic drift.
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Original:  I asked  if age-dependent indicator ("good genes") traits and their preferences can originate and spread depending on the strength of selection and the size of the trait .
Revised:  I asked if age-dependent indicator traits and their preferences can originate and spread depending on the strength of selection and the size of the trait .
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Original:  I asked  if age-dependent indicator ("good genes") traits and their preferences can originate and spread depending on the strength of selection and the size of the trait .
Revised:  I asked if age-dependent indicator ("good genes") traits and their preferences can originate depending on the strength of selection and the size of the trait .
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Original:  I also ask which mode of development (age-dependent versus age-independent) will eventually predominate when both are present in the same population, and if age-independent traits can invade when traitsand preferences are already present . Age-dependent traits evolve in this model under weaker selection and at smaller sizes than age-independent traits , both in isolation and when both types of trait are present .
Revised:  I also ask which mode of development (age-dependent versus age-independent) eventually predominates when both modes occur in the population; and (3) if age-independent traits can invade when traitsand preferences are already present . Age-dependent traits evolve in this model under weaker selection and at smaller sizes than age-independent traits , both in isolation and when both types of trait are present .
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Original:  I also ask which mode of development (age-dependent versus age-independent) will eventually predominate when both are present in the same population, and if age-independent traits can invade when traitsand preferences are already present . Age-dependent traits evolve in this model under weaker selection and at smaller sizes than age-independent traits , both in isolation and when both types of trait are present .
Revised:  I also ask which mode of development (age-dependent versus age-independent) will eventually predominate when both are present in the same population, and if age-independent traits can invade a population with age-dependent traits . Age-dependent traits evolve in this model under weaker selection and at smaller sizes than age-independent traits , both in isolation and when both types of trait are present .
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Original:  I also ask which mode of development (age-dependent versus age-independent) will eventually predominate when both are present in the same population, and if age-independent traits can invade when traitsand preferences are already present . Age-dependent traits evolve in this model under weaker selection and at smaller sizes than age-independent traits , both in isolation and when both types of trait are present .
Revised:  I also ask which mode of development (age-dependent versus age-independent) will eventually predominate when both are present in the same population, and if age-independent traits can invade when traitsand preferences are already present . Age-dependent traits evolve under weaker selection and at smaller sizes than age-independent traits , both in isolation and when both types of trait are present .
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Original:  I also ask which mode of development (age-dependent versus age-independent) will eventually predominate when both are present in the same population, and if age-independent traits can invade when traitsand preferences are already present . Age-dependent traits evolve in this model under weaker selection and at smaller sizes than age-independent traits , both in isolation and when both types of trait are present .
Revised:  I also ask which mode of development (age-dependent versus age-independent) will eventually predominate when both are present in the same population, and if age-independent traits can invade when traitsand preferences are already present . Age-dependent traits evolve in this model under weaker selection and at smaller sizes than age-independent traits .
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Original:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends only on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on both strength of selection and growth rate .
Revised:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on both strength of selection and growth rate .
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Original:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends only on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on both strength of selection and growth rate .
Revised:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends only on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on strength of selection and growth rate .
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Original:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends only on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on both strength of selection and growth rate .
Revised:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends only on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on both strength of selection and growth rate (i.e. size).
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Original:  Invasion of age-independence into populations with established traits and preferences followed a similar pattern , depending only on trait size, and age-dependence still predominated at small trait sizes.
Revised:  Invasion of age-independence into populations with established traits followed a similar pattern , depending only on trait size, and age-dependence still predominated at small trait sizes.
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Original:  Invasion of age-independence into populations with established traits and preferences followed a similar pattern , depending only on trait size, and age-dependence still predominated at small trait sizes.
Revised:  Invasion of age-independence into populations with established traits and preferences followed a similar pattern with age-dependence still predominated at small trait sizes.
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Original:  Invasion of age-independence into populations with established traits and preferences followed a similar pattern , depending only on trait size, and age-dependence still predominated at small trait sizes.
Revised:  Invasion of age-independence into populations with established traits and preferences followed a similar pattern , depending only on trait size, and age-dependence predominating at small trait sizes.
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Original:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends  on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on  strength of selection and growth rate (i.e. size) .
Revised:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends only on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on strength of selection and growth rate (i.e. size) .
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Original:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends  on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on  strength of selection and growth rate (i.e. size) .
Revised:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on both strength of selection and growth rate (i.e. size) .
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Original:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends  on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on  strength of selection and growth rate (i.e. size) .
Revised:  Evolution of age-independent traits depends on trait size, whereas evolution of age-dependent traits depends on strength of selection and growth rate .
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Original:  CA increases transmission bandwidth by aggregating multiple component carriers on the physical layer, while small cells in HetNets are vital for data off-loading and can significantly improve area spectral efficiency compared to using just macrocells .
Revised:  Cellular networks with small cells take on a very heterogeneous characteristic, and are often referred to as HetNets .
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Original:  Our study also indicates that deploying the 800MHz band and 2.5GHz band in both the macro and small cells is optimal .
Revised:  Our study also indicates that deploying the 800MHz band and 2.5GHz band in both the macro and small cells is optimalmulti .
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Original: We consider two-user multiple access games in which one player (primary user) is interested in maximizing its confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and the other player (secondary , cognitive user) employs eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize its data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
Revised: We consider multiple access games in which one player (primary user) is interested in maximizing its confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and the other player (secondary , cognitive user) employs eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize its data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
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Original: We consider two-user multiple access games in which one player (primary user) is interested in maximizing its confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and the other player (secondary , cognitive user) employs eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize its data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
Revised: We consider two-user multiple access games in which primary users are interested in maximizing its confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and the other player (secondary , cognitive user) employs eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize its data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
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Original: We consider two-user multiple access games in which one player (primary user) is interested in maximizing its confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and the other player (secondary , cognitive user) employs eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize its data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
Revised: We consider two-user multiple access games in which one player (primary user) is interested in maximizing their confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and the other player (secondary , cognitive user) employs eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize its data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
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Original: We consider two-user multiple access games in which one player (primary user) is interested in maximizing its confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and the other player (secondary , cognitive user) employs eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize its data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
Revised: We consider two-user multiple access games in which one player (primary user) is interested in maximizing its confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and secondary users employ eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize its data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
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Original: We consider two-user multiple access games in which one player (primary user) is interested in maximizing its confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and the other player (secondary , cognitive user) employs eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize its data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
Revised: We consider two-user multiple access games in which one player (primary user) is interested in maximizing its confidential data rate at the minimum possible transmission power and the other player (secondary , cognitive user) employs eavesdropping as a leverage to maximize their data rate to a common destination at minimum transmission energy.
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Original:  A Stackelberg game formulation is then considered where the primary user is the leader .
Revised:  For the two-player Stackelberg game where the primary user is the leader .
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Original:  Here, the Stackelberg utility achieved Pareto dominates the achieved  Nash utility.
Revised:  Here, the utility achieved Nash utility.
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Original:  Finally we study the unknown eavesdropper channel case numerically where the primary user has only statistical knowledge about the channel gain.
Revised:  Moreover, we study the unknown eavesdropper channel case numerically where the primary user has only statistical knowledge about the channel gain.
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Original:  We derive a Kolmogorov equation describing the expected values of the different frequencies and are able to prove some rigorous analytical results about their behavior.
Revised:  We derive a Kolmogorov equation describing the expected values of the different frequencies and prove some rigorous analytical results about their behavior.
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Original: In the beeswax combs of honey bees, the cells of brood, pollen, and honey have a consistent spatial pattern which is sustained throughout the life of a colony.
Revised: In the beeswax combs of honey bees, the cells of brood, pollen, and honey have a consistent spatial pattern that is sustained throughout the life of a colony.
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Original:  This spatial pattern is believed to emerge from simple behavioral rules . Camazine showed that a set of such rules can explain the formation of the allocation pattern starting from an empty comb and proceeding through the first larval gestational period (Camazine, 1991) .
Revised:  This spatial pattern is believed to emerge from simple behavioral rules . Camazine showed that a set of such rules can explain the formation of the allocation pattern starting from an empty comb .
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Original:  We show that these rules cannot , however, maintain the pattern over longer timeframes , and we propose new, biologically realistic rules that better sustain the observed allocation pattern.
Revised:  We show that these rules cannot maintain the pattern over longer timeframes , and we propose new, biologically realistic rules that better sustain the observed allocation pattern.
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Original:  We develop new metrics for pattern formation and employ them in analyzing pattern retention over each simulation run.
Revised:  We develop new metrics for pattern assessment and employ them in analyzing pattern retention over each simulation run.
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Original:  The method is based upon a reformulation of the standard real-valued Green's function integral expression for the far field amplitude to a complex contour.
Revised:  The method is based upon a reformulation of the standard real-valued Green's function integral expression for the far field amplitude on a complex contour.
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Original:  The method is based upon a reformulation of the standard real-valued Green's function integral expression for the far field amplitude on a complex contour.
Revised:  The method is based upon a reformulation of the classical real-valued Green's function integral expression for the far field amplitude on a complex contour.
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Original:  The method is based upon a reformulation of the standard real-valued Green's function integral expression for the far field amplitude on a complex contour.
Revised:  The method is based upon a reformulation of the standard real-valued Green's function integral expression for the far field amplitude to an integral over a complex contour.
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Original:  On this complex contour  the scattered wave can be calculated very efficiently using the iterative multigrid method  , resulting in a fast and scalable calculation of the far field mapping.
Revised:  On this complex contour the scattered wave can be calculated very efficiently using an iterative multigrid method , resulting in a fast and scalable calculation of the far field mapping.
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Original:  The full complex contour  approach is successfully validated on model problems in two and three spatial dimensions  .
Revised:  The full complex contour ' approach is successfully validated on model problems in two and three spatial dimensions .
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Original: In this paper we present a new highly efficient calculation method for the far field amplitude patterns that arise from scattering problems governed by the d-dimensional Helmholtz equation and, by extension, Schr\"odinger's equation.
Revised: In this paper we present a new highly efficient calculation method for the far field amplitude pattern that arises from scattering problems governed by the d-dimensional Helmholtz equation and, by extension, Schr\"odinger's equation.
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