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Original:  Vojin Rakić has distinguished voluntary from compulsory MBE, claiming that the former is justifiable even if the latter is not ]  ]  .
Revised:  Vojin Rakić has distinguished voluntary from compulsory MBE, claiming that the former is justifiable even if the latter is not ] and ] .
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Original:  The next year the king dies .
Revised:  The next year the king died .
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Original:  With Rwanda in turmoil over the succession, the Germans move in (in 1897, from Tanzania) to claim the region for the Kaiser.
Revised:  With Rwanda in turmoil over the succession, the Germans moved in (in 1897, from Tanzania) to claim the region for the Kaiser.
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Original:  German rule in this most inaccessible of colonies is indirect, achieved mainly by placing agents at the courts of the various local rulers.
Revised:  German rule in this most inaccessible of colonies was indirect, achieved mainly by placing agents at the courts of the various local rulers.
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Original:  The Germans hoped cash taxes, rather than taxes in kind, would force farmers to switch to profitable crops, like coffee, in order to acquire the required cash to pay taxes.
Revised:  The Germans hoped cash taxes, rather than taxes in kind, would force farmers to switch to tradable crops, like coffee, in order to acquire the required cash to pay taxes.
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Original:  The Germans favored Tutsi dominance over the farming Hutus (almost in a feudalistic manner) and granted them basic ruling position .
Revised:  The Germans favored Tutsi dominance over the farming Hutus (almost in a feudalistic manner) and granted them basic ruling positions .
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Original:  But Tutsi power weakened with the introduction of capitalist forces and through increased integration with outside markets and economies.
Revised:  But Tutsi power weakened with the growth of trade and through increased integration with outside markets and economies.
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Original:  By 1899 the Germans  placed advisors at the courts of local chiefs.
Revised:  By 1899 the Germans had placed advisors at the courts of local chiefs.
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Original:  A significant minority of the remaining non-Tutsis political elite were Hutu.
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Original:  However,  he has not renounced his Indian citizenship.
Revised:  However, Indian authorities argue that he has not renounced his Indian citizenship.
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Original: Mehul Chinubhai Choksi (born 5 May 1959) is a fugitive fraud Indian-born businessman living in Antigua and Barbuda, who is wanted by the Indian judicial authorities for criminal conspiracy, criminal breach of trust, cheating and dishonesty including delivery of property, corruption and money laundering.
Revised: Mehul Chinubhai Choksi (born 5 May 1959) is a fraud Indian-born businessman living in Antigua and Barbuda, who is wanted by the Indian judicial authorities for criminal conspiracy, criminal breach of trust, cheating and dishonesty including delivery of property, corruption and money laundering.
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Original: Mehul Chinubhai Choksi (born 5 May 1959) is a fugitive Indian-born businessman living in Antigua and Barbuda, who is wanted by the Indian judicial authorities for criminal conspiracy, criminal breach of trust, cheating and dishonesty including delivery of property, corruption and money laundering.
Revised: Mehul Chinubhai Choksi (born 5 May 1959) is a fraud Indian-born businessman living in Antigua and Barbuda, who is wanted by the Indian judicial authorities for criminal conspiracy, criminal breach of trust, cheating and dishonesty including delivery of property, corruption and money laundering.
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Original: Mehul Chinubhai Choksi (born 5 May 1959) is a fraud Indian-born businessman living in Antigua and Barbuda, who is wanted by the Indian judicial authorities for criminal conspiracy, criminal breach of trust, cheating and dishonesty including delivery of property, corruption and money laundering.
Revised: Mehul Chinubhai Choksi (born 5 May 1959) is a fugitive Indian-born businessman living in Antigua and Barbuda, who is wanted by the Indian judicial authorities for criminal conspiracy, criminal breach of trust, cheating and dishonesty including delivery of property, corruption and money laundering.
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Original:  Choksi holds Antiguan citizenship since 2017.
Revised:  Sharma holds Antiguan citizenship since 2017.
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Original:  Sharma holds Antiguan citizenship since 2017.
Revised:  Choksi holds Antiguan citizenship since 2017.
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Original: Geospiza fulginosa and G. difficilis males on the Galápagos Islands show a noted preference for conspecific females where they meet in sympatry, but not in allopatry.
Revised: Geospiza fuliginosa and G. difficilis males on the Galápagos Islands show a noted preference for conspecific females where they meet in sympatry, but not in allopatry.
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Original: Drosophila upDrosophila fruit flyDrosophila is one of the most studied species in speciation research.
Revised: Drosophila upDrosophila fruit fly Drosophila is one of the most studied species in speciation research.
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Original:  One study in the plants Glycine and Silene '' ;
Revised:  One study in the plants Glycine and Silene ;
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Original:  + Laboratory studies of reinforcementSpeciesExperimental designResultYearDrosophila paulistorumDestroyed hybridsPrezygotic isolation1976D.pseudoobscura & D. persimilisPrezygotic isolation;
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Original:  + Laboratory studies of reinforcementSpeciesExperimental designResultYearDrosophila paulistorumDestroyed hybridsPrezygotic isolation1976D.pseudoobscura & D. persimilisPrezygotic isolation;
Revised:  + Laboratory studies of reinforcementSpeciesExperimental designResultYearDrosophila paulistorumDestroyed hybridsPrezygotic isolation1976D.pseudoobscura & D. persimilisDestroyed hybridsPre-zygotic isolation;
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Original:  reproductive character displacement1950Zea mays1969D. melanogaster19741956No prezygotic isolationdetected1970Prezygotic isolation195319741971 1973 1979Allopatric populations in secondary contact19821991Lee Ehrman, Marney A.
Revised:  reproductive character displacement1950D. melanogasterDestroyed hybridsPre-zygotic isolation; reproductive character displacement1974D. melanogasterDestroyed hybridsPre-zygotic isolation; reproductive character displacement1956D. melanogasterDestroyed hybridsNo pre-zygotic isolation detected1970D. melanogasterDestroyed hybridsPre-zygotic isolation1953D. melanogasterDestroyed hybridsPre-zygotic isolation1974D. melanogasterAllopatric populations in secondary contact19821991Lee Ehrman, Marney A.
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Original:  reproductive character displacement1950Zea mays1969D. melanogaster19741956No prezygotic isolationdetected1970Prezygotic isolation195319741971 1973 1979Allopatric populations in secondary contact19821991Lee Ehrman, Marney A.
Revised:  reproductive character displacement1950Zea mays1969D. melanogaster19741956No prezygotic isolationdetected1970Prezygotic isolation195319741971 1973 1979Allopatric populations in secondary contactN/A1982D. melanogasterN/A1991Lee Ehrman, Marney A.
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Original:  No prezygotic isolation detected1966Allowed gene flow between populations19691984Destroyed some hybrids1983Disruptive selectionPrezygotic isolation ;
Revised:  D. melanogasterNo pre-zygotic isolation detected1966D. melanogasterAllowed gene flow between populations19691984Destroyed some hybrids1983Disruptive selectionPrezygotic isolation ;
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Original: Deputy Minister of Sport and Recreation South Africa, Gert Oosthuizen, addressing the participants of the 3rd Plenary Session of the Sport for Development and Peace International Working Group (SDP IWG) held at the UN Office at Geneva (UNOG), Switzerland, as a keynote speaker.
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Original: Marthinus Christoffel Johannes (Kortbroek) van Schalkwyk (born 10 November 1959) is a South African politician, academic, lawyer, and apartheid-era intelligence operative.
Revised: Marthinus Christoffel Johannes van Schalkwyk (born 10 November 1959) is a South African politician, academic, lawyer, and apartheid-era intelligence operative.
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Original:  "short pants"),"Marthinus van Schalkwyk: From 'Kortbroek' to 'Kortbroke'?",  ENCA, Elections, Tuesday 27 May 2014 - 1:02pm. </ref> a name he earned because of his boyish appearance and lack of political experience when compared to his predecessor, F.W. de Klerk.
Revised:  "short pants"),"Marthinus van Schalkwyk: From 'Kortbroek' to 'Kortbroke'?", '' ENCA, Elections, Tuesday 27 May 2014 - 1:02pm. </ref> a name he earned because of his boyish appearance and lack of political experience when compared to his predecessor, F.W. de Klerk.
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Original:  "short pants"),"Marthinus van Schalkwyk: From 'Kortbroek' to 'Kortbroke'?",  ENCA, Elections, Tuesday 27 May 2014 - 1:02pm. </ref> a name he earned because of his boyish appearance and lack of political experience when compared to his predecessor, F.W. de Klerk.
Revised:  "short pants"),"Marthinus van Schalkwyk: From 'Kortbroek' to 'Kortbroke'?", ENCA, Elections, Tuesday 27 May 2014 - 1:02pm. a name he earned because of his boyish appearance and lack of political experience when compared to his predecessor, F.W. de Klerk.
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Original:  A significant part of the white Afrikaner population views him as a weak politician who destroyed the old NP and merged its successor, the NNP, in a bid to save his own political URL Slammed For 'Treason'",  News24, Archives, Gert Coetzee, 2004-08-10 08:52.
Revised:  A significant part of the white Afrikaner population views him as a weak politician who destroyed the old NP and merged its successor, the NNP, in a bid to save his own political URL Slammed For 'Treason'", '' News24, Archives, Gert Coetzee, 2004-08-10 08:52.
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Original:  In its annual review of ministerial performance for 2013 the Mail and Guardian honoured his significant contributions as Tourism Minister with a C grade, concluding that "With inadequate political credentials, Marthinus van Schalkwyk has justified his stay in Cabinet long after the demise of his New National Party by actually doing his work.
Revised:  In its annual review of ministerial performance for 2013 the Mail and Guardian gave van Schalkwyk a C grade, concluding that "With inadequate political credentials, Marthinus van Schalkwyk has justified his stay in Cabinet long after the demise of his New National Party by actually doing his work.
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Original:  " short pants "),"Marthinus van Schalkwyk: From 'Kortbroek' to 'Kortbroke'?", ''ENCA, Elections, Tuesday 27 May 2014 - 1:02pm. a name he earned because of his boyish appearance and lack of political experience when compared to his predecessor, F.W. de Klerk.
Revised:  " shorts "),"Marthinus van Schalkwyk: From 'Kortbroek' to 'Kortbroke'?", ''ENCA, Elections, Tuesday 27 May 2014 - 1:02pm. a name he earned because of his boyish appearance and lack of political experience when compared to his predecessor, F.W. de Klerk.
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Original: How to Fail at Almost Everything and Still Win Big: Kind of the Story of My Life is a 2013 nonfiction book by Scott Adams, creator of Dilbert , and bestselling author of Win Bigly .
Revised: How to Fail at Almost Everything and Still Win Big: Kind of the Story of My Life is a 2013 nonfiction book by Scott Adams, creator of Dilbert .
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Original:  Adams shares many of the techniques and theories from his life which he believes can drive anyone to success.
Revised:  Adams shares many of the techniques and theories from his life which he believes can increase a person's likelihood of success.
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Original:  There were quotas brought in to limit the number of competitors (particularly from the Untied States and Canada), which are highly competitive in the two events. for the 2010 Olympics the quota system limited the competition for men and women's freestyle skiing (moguls, aerials, and ski-cross) to 180 athletes.
Revised:  There were quotas brought in to limit the number of competitors (particularly from the United States and Canada), which are highly competitive in the two events. for the 2010 Olympics the quota system limited the competition for men and women's freestyle skiing (moguls, aerials, and ski-cross) to 180 athletes.
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Original: Renal ectopia or ectopic kidney describes a kidney that is not located in its usual position.
Revised: Ectopic kidney describes a kidney that is not located in its usual position.
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Original: Biography Brittney Bear Heat is from the Treaty 7 territory.
Revised: Biography Brittney Bear Hat is from the Treaty 7 territory.
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Original:  There are only four well characterized Nectins at the synapse, they are Nectin-1, 2, 3, and 4.
Revised:  There are only four well characterized nectins at the synapse, they are Nectin-1, 2, 3, and 4.
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Original:  All membrane bound Nectins possess an extracellular region with three immunoglobulin-like loops.
Revised:  All membrane-bound nectins possess an extracellular region with three immunoglobulin-like loops.
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Original:  Multiple Nectins on one cell membrane will bind together at the V-type loop to form a cluster of Nectin proteins, a process called Cis-Clustering .
Revised:  Multiple nectins on one cell membrane will bind together at the V-type loop to form a cluster of Nectin proteins, a process called Cis-Clustering .
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Original:  Multiple Nectins on one cell membrane will bind together at the V-type loop to form a cluster of Nectin proteins, a process called Cis-Clustering .
Revised:  Multiple Nectins on one cell membrane will bind together at the V-type loop to form a cluster of nectin proteins, a process called Cis-Clustering .
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Original:  Multiple Nectins on one cell membrane will bind together at the V-type loop to form a cluster of Nectin proteins, a process called Cis-Clustering .
Revised:  Multiple Nectins on one cell membrane will bind together at the V-type loop to form a cluster of Nectin proteins, a process called cis-clustering .
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Original:  When two cells possessing individual Cis-Clusters come into contact they form a strong complex called a Trans-Interaction which provides adhesion and, in some cases, signaling between the two cells.
Revised:  When two cells possessing individual cis-clusters come into contact they form a strong complex called a Trans-Interaction which provides adhesion and, in some cases, signaling between the two cells.
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Original:  When two cells possessing individual Cis-Clusters come into contact they form a strong complex called a Trans-Interaction which provides adhesion and, in some cases, signaling between the two cells.
Revised:  When two cells possessing individual Cis-Clusters come into contact they form a strong complex called a trans-interaction which provides adhesion and, in some cases, signaling between the two cells.
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Original:  The most robust knowledge of Nectin ’s role in synaptic stabilization comes from the synapses made between Mossy Fiber terminals and Pyramidal cell dendrites in the CA3 region of the hippocampus.
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Original:  The most robust knowledge of Nectin ’s role in synaptic stabilization comes from the synapses made between Mossy Fiber terminals and Pyramidal cell dendrites in the CA3 region of the hippocampus.
Revised:  The most robust knowledge of Nectin ’s role in synaptic stabilization comes from the synapses made between mossy fiber terminals and pyramidal cell dendrites in the CA3 region of the hippocampus.
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Original:  The Nectins involved in formation and stabilization of this synapse are Nectin-1 and Nectin-3 which protrude from the plasma membrane of the postsynaptic cell and presynaptic cell, respectively, forming heterophilic extracellular contacts.
Revised:  The nectins involved in formation and stabilization of this synapse are Nectin-1 and Nectin-3 which protrude from the plasma membrane of the postsynaptic cell and presynaptic cell, respectively, forming heterophilic extracellular contacts.
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Original:  The intracellular domain of all Nectins directly bind to a protein called L-Afadin.
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Original:  In this way, Nectins form ridged connections of the cells actin architecture allowing for the synapse to develop in a controlled and stable environment.
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Original:  As synapses mature in the CA3 region of the Hippocampus, Nectins and Cadherins , which affiliate closely with one another in synaptic stabilization, are shifted to the periphery of the active zone and form the Puncta Adherentia Junction (PAJ).
Revised:  As synapses mature in the CA3 region of the hippocampus, nectins and cadherins , which affiliate closely with one another in synaptic stabilization, are shifted to the periphery of the active zone and form the Puncta Adherentia Junction (PAJ).
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Original:  As synapses mature in the CA3 region of the Hippocampus, Nectins and Cadherins , which affiliate closely with one another in synaptic stabilization, are shifted to the periphery of the active zone and form the Puncta Adherentia Junction (PAJ).
Revised:  As synapses mature in the CA3 region of the Hippocampus, Nectins and Cadherins , which affiliate closely with one another in synaptic stabilization, are shifted to the periphery of the active zone and form the puncta adherentia junction (PAJ).
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Original:  The PAJ functions much like Adherens junctions in epithelial tissues.
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Original:  Neurexin-Neuroligin interactions promote synapse stabilization.
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Original:  The PAJ functions much like  adherens junctions in epithelial tissues.
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Original: Many cadherins in the CNS exhibit distinct spatial and temporal expression patterns.
Revised: Many cadherins in the central nervous system exhibit distinct spatial and temporal expression patterns.
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Original:  The tube is passed down into the oesophagus and the gastric balloon is inflated inside the stomach.
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Original: Eponym It is named for Robert William Sengstaken Sr. (1923–1978), an American Neurosurgeon and Arthur Blakemore (1897-1970), an American Vascular Surgeon .
Revised: Eponym It is named for Robert William Sengstaken Sr. (1923–1978), an American neurosurgeon and Arthur Blakemore (1897-1970), an American Vascular Surgeon .
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Original: Eponym It is named for Robert William Sengstaken Sr. (1923–1978), an American Neurosurgeon and Arthur Blakemore (1897-1970), an American Vascular Surgeon .
Revised: Eponym It is named for Robert William Sengstaken Sr. (1923–1978), an American Neurosurgeon and Arthur Blakemore (1897-1970), an American vascular surgeon .
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Original: Eponym It is named for Robert William Sengstaken Sr. (1923–1978), an American neurosurgeon  and Arthur Blakemore (1897-1970), an American vascular surgeon.
Revised: Eponym It is named for Robert William Sengstaken Sr. (1923–1978), an American neurosurgeon , and Arthur Blakemore (1897-1970), an American vascular surgeon.
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Original:  They conceptualized and invented the tube in the early 1950s .
Revised:  They conceptualized and invented the tube in the early 1950spipi .
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Original:  Sengstaken conceptualized and invented the tube in the early 1950s out of condoms, rubber bands, and tubing with the help of his wife Geraldine "Gerry" Boyce Sengstaken .
Revised:  They conceptualized and invented the tube in the early 1950s out of condoms, rubber bands, and tubing with the help of his wife Geraldine "Gerry" Boyce Sengstaken .
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Original:  Sengstaken conceptualized and invented the tube in the early 1950s out of condoms, rubber bands, and tubing with the help of his wife Geraldine "Gerry" Boyce Sengstaken .
Revised:  Sengstaken conceptualized and invented the tube in the early 1950s .
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Original:   People from West Vancouver Category:
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Original: Sportspeople from British Columbia Category:Living people Category:Paralympic gold medalists for Canada Category:Paralympic silver medalists for Canada Category:Paralympic bronze medalists for Canada Category:Medalists at the 2018 Winter Paralympics Category:Canadian female alpine skiers Category:People with Crohn's disease Category:Paralympic alpine skiers of Canada Category:Paralympic medalists in alpine skiing Category:Alpine skiers at the 2018 Winter Paralympi
Revised: Sportspeople from British Columbia Category:Paralympic gold medalists for Canada Category:Paralympic silver medalists for Canada Category:Paralympic bronze medalists for Canada Category:Medalists at the 2018 Winter Paralympics Category:Canadian female alpine skiers Category:People with Crohn's disease Category:Paralympic alpine skiers of Canada Category:Paralympic medalists in alpine skiing Category:Alpine skiers at the 2018 Winter Paralympi
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Original:  277x277px|Mollie reaching for the finish line and her Slalom Silver in 2018 340x340px|Mollie on her way to a Giant Slalom bronze medal in Korea 2018 She was named the Female Para-Alpine Athlete of the Year at the Audi 2018 Canadian Ski Racing Awards and the Best Female Athlete at the 2018 Canadian Paralympic Sport Awards.
Revised:  277x277px|Mollie reaching for the finish line and her Slalom Silver in 2018 She was named the Female Para-Alpine Athlete of the Year at the Audi 2018 Canadian Ski Racing Awards and the Best Female Athlete at the 2018 Canadian Paralympic Sport Awards.
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Original:  277x277px|Mollie reaching for the finish line and her Slalom Silver in 2018
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Original: Pradyot Kumar Bhattacharya (13 November 1913 - 12 January 1933) was a Bengali revolutionary and activist of  Indian freedom movement.
Revised: Pradyot Kumar Bhattacharya (13 November 1913 - 12 January 1933) was a Bengali revolutionary and activist of the Indian freedom movement.
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Original:  He joined in anti British movement and Jugantar group while studying in Midnapore College.
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Original:  Revolutionaries of Bengal Volunteers decided to assassin ruthless Second magistrate Mr. Robert Doglas because he was responsible for firing and killing two unarmed activist in Hijli Detaintion Camp.
Revised:  The revolutionaries of the Bengal Volunteers decided to assassin ruthless Second magistrate Mr. Robert Doglas because he was responsible for firing and killing two unarmed activist in Hijli Detaintion Camp.
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