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Original:  By both accidental and  purposeful intent, a pandemic ensued that quickly killed lower-level characters and drastically changed normal gameplay, as players did what they could do to avoid infection.
Revised:  By both accidental and then purposeful intent, a pandemic ensued that quickly killed lower-level characters and drastically changed normal gameplay, as players did what they could do to avoid infection.
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Original:  Due to a programming error , when hunters or warlocks dismissed their pets, those pets would keep any active debuffs when summoned again.
Revised:  Due to a programming oversight , when hunters or warlocks dismissed their pets, those pets would keep any active debuffs when summoned again.
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Original:  in effect, this turned them into asymptomatic disease carriers and a form of vector for the debuff.
Revised:  in effect, this turned them into asymptomatic carriers and a form of vector for the debuff.
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Original:  The major towns and cities were abandoned by the population as panic set in and players rushed to evacuate to the relative safety of the countryside, leaving urban areas filled to the brim with corpses, and the city streets literally white with the bones of the dead.
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Original:  He commented that this might be the first time a disease passed from player to player in a game.
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Original:  This meant that encountering a lone zombie was not as dangerous as encountering a large mass of infected  .
Revised:  This meant that encountering a lone zombie was not as dangerous as encountering a large mass of infected individuals .
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Original:  Green fire On 12 January 2017, lasting for a day until a hotfix was released by Blizzard, a plague started, involving a debuff from the second boss in the instance Sunwell Plateau - Brutallus, called Burnwhich damages players over time, specifically doing significantly increasing damage .
Revised:  Green fire On 12 January 2017, lasting for a day until a hotfix was released by Blizzard, a plague involving a debuff from the second boss in the instance Sunwell Plateau - Brutallus, called Burnwhich damages players over time, specifically doing significantly increasing damage .
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Original:  Green fire On 12 January 2017, lasting for a day until a hotfix was released by Blizzard, a plague started, involving a debuff from the second boss in the instance Sunwell Plateau - Brutallus, called Burnwhich damages players over time, specifically doing significantly increasing damage .
Revised:  Green fire On 12 January 2017, lasting for a day until a hotfix was released by Blizzard, a plague started, involving a debuff called Burn, that increasingly damaged players over time, specifically doing significantly increasing damage .
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Original:  The debuff could be passed from player to player of the same faction within 2 yards, and would kill low level players in a few seconds , while higher level players would manage to keep themselves alive.
Revised:  The debuff could be passed between players of the same faction within 2 yards, and would kill low level players in a few seconds , while higher level players would manage to keep themselves alive.
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Original:  The debuff could be passed from player to player of the same faction within 2 yards, and would kill low level players in a few seconds , while higher level players would manage to keep themselves alive.
Revised:  The debuff could be passed from player to player of the same faction and could kill low-level players in a few seconds , while higher level players would manage to keep themselves alive.
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Original:  It was believed that the debuff had been taken out of the instance using a hunter pet, which had the effect on . During the incident , Blizzard gamemasters disinfected players and kept the plague under control by warning groups, such as "Green Fire Parade", who were spreading the plague from Stormwind across Goldshire.
Revised:  It was believed that the debuff had been taken out of the boss area by a pet . During the incident , Blizzard gamemasters disinfected players and kept the plague under control by warning groups, such as "Green Fire Parade", who were spreading the plague from Stormwind across Goldshire.
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Original:  It was believed that the debuff had been taken out of the instance using a hunter pet, which had the effect on . During the incident , Blizzard gamemasters disinfected players and kept the plague under control by warning groups, such as "Green Fire Parade", who were spreading the plague from Stormwind across Goldshire.
Revised:  It was believed that the debuff had been taken out of the instance using a hunter pet, which had the effect on . During the incident Blizzard gamemasters "disinfected" players and kept the plague under control by warning groups, such as "Green Fire Parade", who were spreading the plague from Stormwind across Goldshire.
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Original:  Model for epidemic research In March 2007, Ran D  Balicer, an epidemiologist physician at the Ben-Gurion University of the Negev in Beersheba, Israel, published an article in the journal Epidemiology that described the similarities between this outbreak and the recent SARS and avian influenza outbreaks.
Revised:  Model for epidemic research In March 2007, Ran D . Balicer, an epidemiologist physician at the Ben-Gurion University of the Negev in Beersheba, Israel, published an article in the journal Epidemiology that described the similarities between this outbreak and the recent SARS and avian influenza outbreaks.
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Original:  Model for epidemic research In March 2007, Ran D  Balicer, an epidemiologist physician at the Ben-Gurion University of the Negev in Beersheba, Israel, published an article in the journal Epidemiology that described the similarities between this outbreak and the recent SARS and avian influenza outbreaks.
Revised:  Model for epidemic research In March 2007, Ran D Balicer, an epidemiologist physician at the Ben-Gurion University of the Negev in Beersheba, Israel, published an article in the journal Epidemiology that described the similarities between this outbreak and the then-recent SARS and avian influenza outbreaks.
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Original:  Dr. Gary Smith, professor of Population Biology and Epidemiology at the University of Pennsylvania, commented that very few mathematical models of disease transmission take host behavior into account, but also questioned how representative of real life a virtual model could be.
Revised:  Dr. Gary Smith, professor of population biology and epidemiology at the University of Pennsylvania, commented that very few mathematical models of disease transmission take host behavior into account, but also questioned how representative of real life a virtual model could be.
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Original:  References External links ]  Category:Video game controversies Category:Fictional diseases and disorders Category:Video game glitches Category:World of Warcraft Category:2005 in video gami
Revised:  References External links ] Reference
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Original: The Corrupted Blood incident (or World of Warcraft URL was a virtual pandemic in the MMORPG World of Warcraft, which began on September 13, 2005, and lasted for one month.
Revised: The Corrupted Blood incident (or World of Warcraft pandemic) was a virtual pandemic in the MMORPG World of Warcraft, which began on September 13, 2005, and lasted for one month.
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Original:  Fermented products have applications as food as well as in general industry.
Revised:  Fermented products have applicatins as food as well as in general industry.
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Original:  Fermented products have applicatins as food as well as in general industry.
Revised:  Fermented products have applications as food as well as in general industry.
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Original: Fermentation medium The microbes or eukarytic cells used for fermentation grow in (or on) specially designed growth medium which supplies the nutrients required by the organisms or cells.
Revised: Fermentation medium The microbes or eukaryotic cells used for fermentation grow in (or on) specially designed growth medium which supplies the nutrients required by the organisms or cells.
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Original: Flannelgraph ( sometimes called a flannel board) is a storytelling system that uses a board covered with flannel fabric, usually resting on an easel.
Revised: Flannelgraph ( also called a flannel board) is a storytelling system that uses a board covered with flannel fabric, usually resting on an easel.
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Original: Flannelgraph (also called a flannel board) is a storytelling system that uses a board covered with flannel fabric, usually resting on an easel.
Revised: Flannelgraph (also called flannel board) is a storytelling system that uses a board covered with flannel fabric, usually resting on an easel.
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Original: Flannelgraph (also called flannel board or "flannelgram" ) is a storytelling system that uses a board covered with flannel fabric, usually resting on an easel.
Revised: Flannelgraph (also called flannel board or flannelgram ) is a storytelling system that uses a board covered with flannel fabric, usually resting on an easel.
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Original:  This may be attributed, in part, to the fact that flannelgraph is relatively inexpensive, yet provides a more vivid alternative to storytelling without visual illustration. . Some utilize mainly the prepared lessons, while others create thought-provoking introductory materials or concluding applications for their particular audience, as in the brief lessons Florence Hunnicutt, who worked with CEF for 60 years, has on Youtube.
Revised:  This may be attributed, in part, to the fact that flannelgraph is relatively inexpensive, yet provides a more vivid alternative to storytelling without visual illustration. 
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Original:  Most people use pre-published pictures and lessons, such as from Betty Lukens or Child Evangelism Fellowship, and some add on their own materials for introduction or application, as in Florence Hunnicutt's "Illustrating Application"  videos on YouTube.
Revised:  Most people use pre-published pictures and lessons, such as from Betty Lukens or Child Evangelism Fellowship, and some add on their own materials for introduction or application, as in the "Illustrating Application" videos on YouTube.
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Original:  Most people use pre-published pictures and lessons, such as from Betty Lukens or Child Evangelism Fellowship, and some add on their own materials for introduction or application, as in Florence Hunnicutt's "Illustrating Application"  videos on YouTube.
Revised:  Most people use pre-published pictures and lessons, such as from Betty Lukens or Child Evangelism Fellowship, and some add on their own materials for introduction or application, as in Florence Hunnicutt's "Illustrating Application" (Florence Hunnicutt) videos on YouTube.
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Original: Napoleonic Wars After Napoleon's campaign of Italy, San Marino found itself on the border between the Kingdom of Italy and long-time ally , the Papal States.
Revised: Napoleonic Wars After Napoleon's campaign of Italy, San Marino found itself on the border between the Kingdom of Italy and long-time ally the Papal States.
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Original:  On February 5, 1797, when, with the arrival of a letter from General Louis Alexandre Berthier addressed to the Regents, it was required to arrest and consign the Bishop of Rimini, Monsignor Vincenzo Ferretti, accused of instigating crimes against  French Empire, who fled with all his possessions to San Marino and refusal would result in the immediate intervention of French troops.
Revised:  On February 5, 1797, when, with the arrival of a letter from General Louis Alexandre Berthier addressed to the Regents, it was required to arrest and consign the Bishop of Rimini, Monsignor Vincenzo Ferretti, accused of instigating crimes against the French Empire, who fled with all his possessions to San Marino and refusal would result in the immediate intervention of French troops.
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Original:  Although faced with many hardships (with his wife Anita who was carrying their fifth child dying near Comacchio before they could reach the refuge), the hospitality received by Giuseppe on San Marino would later prove to be a shaping influence on Giuseppe's diplomatic manner, presaging the themes and similar language used in his political correspondences such as his letter to Joseph Cowen.
Revised:  Although faced with many hardships (with his wife Anita who was carrying their fifth child dying near Comacchio before they could reach the refuge), the hospitality received by Giuseppe in San Marino would later prove to be a shaping influence on Giuseppe's diplomatic manner, presaging the themes and similar language used in his political correspondences such as his letter to Joseph Cowen.
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Original: Post-War period and modern times After the war, San Marino became  the first country in Western Europe to be ruled by a communist party (the Sammarinese Communist Party, in coalition with the Sammarinese Socialist Party) through democratic elections.
Revised: Post-War period and modern times After the war, San Marino became one of the first country in Western Europe to be ruled by a communist party (the Sammarinese Communist Party, in coalition with the Sammarinese Socialist Party) through democratic elections.
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Original:  This was the first time anywhere in the world, when a communist government was democratically elected into power.
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Original: Post-War period and modern times After the war, San Marino became one of the first country in Western Europe to be ruled by a communist party (the Sammarinese Communist Party, in coalition with the Sammarinese Socialist Party) through democratic elections.
Revised: Post-War period and modern times After the war, San Marino became one of the first countries in Western Europe to be ruled by a communist party (the Sammarinese Communist Party, in coalition with the Sammarinese Socialist Party) through democratic elections.
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Original:  This was one of the first times anywhere in the world , when a communist government was democratically elected into power.
Revised:  This was one of the first times anywhere in the world that a communist government was democratically elected into power.
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Original:  This royal symbol is the "Indicator" to know who is the real Sulu Sultanate heir at present.
Revised:  This royal symbol is an "Indicator" to know who is the real Sulu Sultanate heir at present.
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Original: Nut and tree of the coco de mer, a rare species of palm tree native to the Seychelles archipelago in the Indian Ocean, is  subject of various legends and lore.
Revised: Nut and tree of the coco de mer, a rare species of palm tree native to the Seychelles archipelago in the Indian Ocean, is the subject of various legends and lore.
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Original: General Sir Arthur Singleton Wynne  (5 March 1846 – 6 February 1936) was a senior British Army officer who went on to be Military Secretary.
Revised: General Sir Arthur Singleton Wynne , (5 March 1846 – 6 February 1936) was a senior British Army officer who went on to be Military Secretary.
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Original: Churchill, W.S. London to Ladysmith via Pretoria, London: Longmans, Green & Co. 1900, ch. XX During the Battle of the Tugela Heights  Wynne was himself slightly injured  and his command was given to Colonel Walter Kitchener.
Revised: Churchill, W.S. London to Ladysmith via Pretoria, London: Longmans, Green & Co. 1900, ch. XX During the Battle of the Tugela Heights Wynne was himself slightly injured , and his command was given to Colonel Walter Kitchener.
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Original: Brigadier-General Wynne Thames Star, 1900 He became Adjutant of his Regiment in 1868.
Revised: Brigadier-General Wynne Thames Star, 1900 He became adjutant of his regiment in 1868.
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Original:  In 1877 he became Superintendent of Army Signalling during the Iowaki campaign.
Revised:  In 1877 Wynne became Superintendent of Army Signalling during the Iowaki campaign.
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Original:  In 1885 he was decorated for service in Sudan  and by 1889 he was Deputy Assistant Adjutant General at Army Headquarters.
Revised:  In 1885 he was decorated for service in Sudan , and by 1889 he was Deputy Assistant Adjutant General at Army Headquarters.
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Original:  By 1891 he was Assistant Adjutant-General at the Curragh.
Revised:  By 1891 Wynne was Assistant Adjutant-General at the Curragh.
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Original:  He served in the Second Boer War and was made Deputy Adjutant-General for the Natal Field Force in South Africa  and after the Battle of Spion Kop he was given command of the 11th infantry brigade in place of General Edward Woodgate who was killed.
Revised:  Wynne served in the Second Boer War and was made Deputy Adjutant-General for the Natal Field Force in South Africa and after the Battle of Spion Kop he was given command of the 11th infantry brigade in place of General Edward Woodgate who was killed.
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Original:  He served in the Second Boer War and was made Deputy Adjutant-General for the Natal Field Force in South Africa  and after the Battle of Spion Kop he was given command of the 11th infantry brigade in place of General Edward Woodgate who was killed.
Revised:  He served in the Second Boer War and was made Deputy Adjutant-General for the Natal Field Force in South Africa , and after the Battle of Spion Kop he was given command of the 11th infantry brigade in place of General Edward Woodgate who was killed.
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Original:  He served in the Second Boer War and was made Deputy Adjutant-General for the Natal Field Force in South Africa  and after the Battle of Spion Kop he was given command of the 11th infantry brigade in place of General Edward Woodgate who was killed.
Revised:  He served in the Second Boer War and was made Deputy Adjutant-General for the Natal Field Force in South Africa and after the Battle of Spion Kop he was given command of the 11th Infantry Brigade in place of General Edward Woodgate who was killed.
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Original:  He served in the Second Boer War and was made Deputy Adjutant-General for the Natal Field Force in South Africa  and after the Battle of Spion Kop he was given command of the 11th infantry brigade in place of General Edward Woodgate who was killed.
Revised:  He served in the Second Boer War and was made Deputy Adjutant-General for the Natal Field Force in South Africa and after the Battle of Spion Kop he was given command of the 11th infantry brigade in place of General Edward Woodgate , who had been killed.
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Original:  He was mentioned in despatches (including by Lord Kitchener  dated 23 June 1902).
Revised:  He was mentioned in despatches (including by Lord Kitchener , dated 23 June 1902).
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Original:  Following his return to the United Kingdom, he was appointed Deputy Adjutant-General to the Forces on 14 May 1902, General Officer Commanding 10th Division within IV Army Corps and General Officer Commanding Eastern District in 1904 and General Officer Commanding 6th Division in 1905.
Revised:  Following his return to the United Kingdom, Wynne was appointed Deputy Adjutant-General to the Forces on 14 May 1902, General Officer Commanding 10th Division within IV Army Corps and General Officer Commanding Eastern District in 1904 and General Officer Commanding 6th Division in 1905.
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Original:  In retirement he was promoted general and became Keeper of the Jewel House, holding the office from 1911 to 1917.
Revised:  In retirement Wynne was promoted general and became Keeper of the Jewel House, holding the office from 1911 to 1917.
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Original:  Category:1846 births Category:1936 deaths Category:British Army generals Category:  King's Own Yorkshire Light Infantry officers Category:Knights Grand Cross of the Order of the Bath Category: Deputy Lieutenants of Westmorland Category:British military personnel of the Second Anglo-Afghan War Category:British Army personnel of the Mahdist War Category:British Army personnel of the Second Boer War Category:Masters of the Jewel Offi
Revised:  Category:1846 births Category:1936 deaths Category:British Army generals Category: British Army personnel of the Mahdist War Category:British Army personnel of the Second Boer War Category:British military personnel of the Second Anglo-Afghan War Category:Deputy Lieutenants of Westmorland Category: King's Own Yorkshire Light Infantry officers Category:Knights Grand Cross of the Order of the Bath Category: Deputy Lieutenants of Westmorland Category:British military personnel of the Second Anglo-Afghan War Category:British Army personnel of the Mahdist War Category:British Army personnel of the Second Boer War Category:Masters of the Jewel Offi
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Original:  Sligo. He married Emily Mary Turner, daughter of Charles Turner of Warcop, Westmoreland, on 8th September 1886.
Revised:  Sligo. He married Emily Mary Turner, daughter of Charles Turner of Warcop, Westmoreland, on 8 September 1886.
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Original: Personal life Blackwood was born in Johannesburg  South Africa, but has lived in the UK since she was two-months-old .
Revised: Personal life Blackwood was born in Johannesburg , South Africa, but has lived in the UK since she was two-months-old .
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Original: Personal life Blackwood was born in Johannesburg  South Africa, but has lived in the UK since she was two-months-old .
Revised: Personal life Blackwood was born in Johannesburg South Africa, but has lived in the UK since she was two months old .
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Original: Personal life Blackwood was born in Johannesburg, South Africa, but has lived in the UK since she was two months old.
Revised: Early life Blackwood was born in Johannesburg, South Africa, but has lived in the UK since she was two months old.
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Original:  At 14 she began studying at the Trinity School of Music, and eventually studies music at university.
Revised:  At 14 she began studying at the Trinity School of Music, and eventually studied music at university.
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Original:  Blackwood has been a member of the Conservative Christian Fellowship since 2005 and is a regular worshipper at the Church of England's St Aldate's in Oxford.
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Original:  Blackwood studied Music at St Anne's College, Oxford and Somerville College, Oxford, and later studied for an MPhil degree in Musicology at Emmanuel College, Cambridge.
Revised:  She studied Music at St Anne's College, Oxford and Somerville College, Oxford, and later studied for an MPhil degree in Musicology at Emmanuel College, Cambridge.
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Original:  Saudi population grew sevenfold from 1960 to 2010, World Population Prospects: The 2010 Revision and petrol prices are subsidized and cost users less than equivalent quantities of bottled water.
Revised:  Saudi population grew sevenfold from 1960 to 2010, and petrol prices are subsidized and cost users less than equivalent quantities of bottled water.
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Original:  In 2020 in 4quarter and 2quarter 2021 record revenue ~25milliards\billions dollars URL 
Revised:  In 2020 in 4quarter and 2quarter 2021 record revenue ~25milliards\billions dollars URL .
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Original:  Saudi Arabia is a major member, a leader of the OPEC, the Top of the G20 group of World economies , and OIC members of Middle east and North African countries .
Revised:  Saudi Arabia is a major member, a leader of the OPEC, Top of the G20 group of World economies , and OIC members of Middle east and North African countries .
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