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Original:  Adam "Pacman" Jones was supposed to address to reporters of his incident with his bodyguard in which police are calling it a private case and will most likely not lead to any charges.
Revised: Dallas Cowboys cornerback Adam "Pacman" Jones was supposed to address to reporters of his incident with his bodyguard in which police are calling it a private case and will most likely not lead to any charges.
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Original:  Police were called to a disturbance call at the hotel  where Jones and his bodyguard were in a bathroom and got into a argument.
Revised:  Police were called to a disturbance call at the hotel where Jones and his bodyguard arguing.
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Original:  Jones and his bodyguard said everything was just fine and they were both driven away by a friend.
Revised:  Jones and his bodyguard told police everything was fine and were driven away by a friend.
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Original:  The owner of the Dallas Cowboys has not yet spoken to reporters . Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and it shouldn't distract their team.
Revised:  Cowboys owner Jerry Jones has not yet spoken to reporters . Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and it shouldn't distract their team.
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Original:  The owner of the Dallas Cowboys has not yet spoken to reporters . Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and it shouldn't distract their team.
Revised:  The owner of the Dallas Cowboys has not yet spoken to the media . Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and it shouldn't distract their team.
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Original:  The owner of the Dallas Cowboys has not yet spoken to reporters . Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and it shouldn't distract their team.
Revised:  The owner of the Dallas Cowboys has not yet spoken to reporters . Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and shouldn't distract their team.
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Original:    Goodell told ESPN radio that he was frustrated that the league was even discussing the incident involving Jones and his bodyguard.
Revised:  National Football League Commissioner Roger Goodell told ESPN radio that he was frustrated that the league was even discussing the incident involving Jones and his bodyguard.
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Original:   Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and shouldn't distract the team.
Revised:  "They were literally kidding each other," Jerry Jones told the Associated Press Thursday. "They were jiving around ... and all of a sudden one of them starting saying some things, and here you go." Cowboys nose tackle Tank Johnson said everything was overblown and shouldn't distract the team.
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Original: "They were literally kidding each other," Jerry Jones told the Associated Press  Thursday.
Revised: "They were literally kidding each other," Jerry Jones told the Associated Press on Thursday.
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Original:  The Danish peace research Øberg, however criticise the choice of Ahtisaari, the recipient of the prize for 2008, because of his role in the Balkans, claiming that the work of Ahtisaari added to hostilities there, instead of reducing them 
Revised:  The Danish peace researcher Øberg, however criticise the choice of Ahtisaari, the recipient of the prize for 2008, because of his role in the Balkans, claiming that the work of Ahtisaari added to hostilities there, instead of reducing them 
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Original:  The Danish peace research Øberg, however criticise the choice of Ahtisaari, the recipient of the prize for 2008, because of his role in the Balkans, claiming that the work of Ahtisaari added to hostilities there, instead of reducing them 
Revised:  The Danish peace research Øberg, however criticises the choice of Ahtisaari, the recipient of the prize for 2008, because of his role in the Balkans, claiming that the work of Ahtisaari added to hostilities there, instead of reducing them 
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Original:  The Danish peace research Øberg, however criticise the choice of Ahtisaari, the recipient of the prize for 2008, because of his role in the Balkans, claiming that the work of Ahtisaari added to hostilities there, instead of reducing them 
Revised:  The Danish peace research Øberg, however criticise the choice of Ahtisaari, the recipient of the prize for 2008, because of his role in the Balkans, claiming that the work of Ahtisaari added to hostilities there, instead of reducing them . Furthermore Øberg, says the Nobel Peace Committee is not comprised of experts in the relevant field, unlike the committees for the scientific prizes
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Original:  OSLO, Norway: The Nobel Peace Committee announced that Martti Ahtisaari, former president and Finnish diplomat, has received the Nobel Peace Prize for 2008.
Revised:  The Nobel Peace Committee announced that Martti Ahtisaari, former president and Finnish diplomat, has received the Nobel Peace Prize for 2008.
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Original: Norway's Nobel committee praised Martti Ahtisaari for his efforts to help secure peace in a number of conflict torn countries during his lengthy career as U.N. diplomat, Finnish president and later, peace activist with his organization, the Crisis Management Initiative.
Revised: Norway's Nobel committee praised Martti Ahtisaari for his efforts to help secure peace in a number of conflict torn countries during his lengthy career as a United Nations diplomat, Finnish president and later, peace activist with his organization, the Crisis Management Initiative.
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Original:  Former U.S. Vice-President Al Gore won last year's Nobel peace prize along with the U.N. panel on climate change for their work on raising attention to the threat of global warming.
Revised:  Former United States Vice-President Al Gore won last year's Nobel peace prize along with the U.N. panel on climate change for their work on raising attention to the threat of global warming.
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Original: Oil has seen losses of more then $6 in trading with the current price of a barrel of oil less then $ 80.
Revised: Oil has seen losses of more than $6 in trading with the current price of a barrel of oil less than $ 80.
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Original:  The Dow Jones Industrial Average fell to it's lowest level in five years at 8,579.19, falling 679 points in one day.
Revised:  The Dow Jones Industrial Average fell to its lowest level in five years at 8,579.19, falling 679 points in one day.
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Original: Asia's markets have seen the biggest sell off .
Revised: Asian markets saw the biggest sell-off .
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Original:  The Nikkei drop 9.62\% to reach a 20 year low.
Revised:  The Nikkei dropped 9.62\% to reach a 20 year low.
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Original:  Japan also saw a collapse of a mid size insurance company, Yamato Life Insurance Company, which declared bankruptcy.
Revised:  Japan also saw a collapse of a mid-size insurance company, Yamato Life Insurance Company, which declared bankruptcy.
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Original:  The Hang Seng, which was one of the few markets that was positive yesterday, saw a drop of 7.19\%.
Revised:  The Hang Seng, which was one of the few markets that was positive yesterday, fell 7.19\%.
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Original:  Also, oil related companies saw large drops as an result of a expected decrease in oil consumption.
Revised:  Also, oil related companies saw large drops as an result of an expected decrease in oil consumption.
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Original:  The U.S. markets opened lower with the Dow Jones Industrial Average reaching below 8,000, before recovering slightly.
Revised:  The U.S. markets opened lower with the Dow Jones Industrial Average falling below 8,000, before recovering slightly.
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Original: The director of the World Trade Organization has called for a meeting to ensure developing countries will have access to financing for trade.
Revised: The head of the World Trade Organization has called for a meeting to ensure developing countries will have access to financing for trade.
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Original:   The meeting, which is schedule for November 11, will allow  Around 90 percent of the  14 trillion in world trade is financed by credit .
Revised:  The meeting, which is schedule for November 11, will allow Around 90 percent of the 14 trillion in world trade is financed by credit 
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Original:  Developing countries have seen several recent years of positive growth but the effects of the global financial crisis on these countries have pushed growth levels down.
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Original:  He also invited the five leading banks in trade finance: Citigroup, Commerzbank, Royal Bank of Scotland, JP Morgan, and HSBC  
Revised:  He also invited the five leading banks in trade finance: Citigroup, Commerzbank, Royal Bank of Scotland, JP Morgan, and HSBC . 
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Original:  He also invited the five leading banks in trade finance: Citigroup, Commerzbank, Royal Bank of Scotland, JP Morgan , and HSBC.
Revised:  He also invited the five leading banks in trade finance: Citigroup, Commerzbank, Royal Bank of Scotland, JPMorgan Chase , and HSBC.
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Original:  In the same speech, Lamy said that progress on the Doha Development Round of trade is continuing but did not say that it would be finished this year
Revised:  Lamy also said that work on the Doha Development Round of trade is continuing but did not say that it would be finished this year
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Original:  In the same speech, Lamy said that progress on the Doha Development Round of trade is continuing but did not say that it would be finished this year
Revised:  In the same speech, Lamy said that progress on the Doha Development Round of trade is continuing but did not say if it would be finished this year
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Original: Credit is vital to trade with around 90 percent of the US$14 trillion in world trade is financed by credit.
Revised: Credit is vital to trade with around 90 percent of the US$14 trillion in world trade financed by credit.
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Original:  Lamy has asked that the heads of the World Bank, International Monetary Fund, and other regional development events to attend.
Revised:  Lamy has asked that the heads of the World Bank, International Monetary Fund, and other regional development banks to attend.
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Original:  He also invited the five leading  banks in trade finance: Citigroup, Commerzbank, Royal Bank of Scotland, JPMorgan Chase, and HSBC.
Revised:  He also invited the five leading commericial banks in trade finance: Citigroup, Commerzbank, Royal Bank of Scotland, JPMorgan Chase, and HSBC.
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Original:  Anne is a candidate in Quebec's Westmount—Ville-Marie riding, running under the New Democratic Party (NDP) banner.
Revised:  Dowson is a candidate in Quebec's Westmount—Ville-Marie riding, running under the New Democratic Party (NDP) banner.
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Original: In our attempt to speak with as many candidates as possible during the 2008 Canadian federal election, Wikinews has talked via email with David Sparrow.
Revised: In an attempt to speak with as many candidates as possible during the 2008 Canadian federal election, Wikinews has talked via email with David Sparrow.
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Original:  David is a candidate in Ontario's Don Valley West riding, running under the New Democratic Party (NDP) banner.
Revised:  Sparrow is a candidate in Ontario's Don Valley West riding, running under the New Democratic Party (NDP) banner.
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Original:  The following is an interview with Mr. Sparrow, conducted via email.
Revised:  The following is an interview with Sparrow, conducted via email.
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Original:  Larry is a candidate in Alberta's Calgary Southwest riding, running under the Christian Hertiage Party of Canada  banner.
Revised:  Heather is a candidate in Alberta's Calgary Southwest riding, running under the Christian Hertiage Party of Canada banner.
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Original:  Larry is a candidate in Alberta's Calgary Southwest riding, running under the Christian Hertiage Party of Canada  banner.
Revised:  Larry is a candidate in Alberta's Calgary Southwest riding, running under the Christian Heritage Party of Canada banner.
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Original:  The following is an interview with Mr. Heather, conducted via email.
Revised:  The following is an interview with Heather, conducted via email.
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Original: In August  Russian troops joined on South Ossetia's side after Georgia moved in in an attempt to regain control of the breakaway region.
Revised: In August , Russian troops joined on South Ossetia's side after Georgia moved in in an attempt to regain control of the breakaway region.
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Original:  Buffer zones were vacated by troops this week, and today Russia was due to move out of the rest of the nation.
Revised:  The buffer zones were vacated by troops this week, and today Russia was due to move out of the rest of the nation.
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Original:  Russia also invaded Abkhazia and nearby buffer zones.
Revised:  Russia also moved troops into Abkhazia and nearby buffer zones.
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Original: In August, Russian troops joined on South Ossetia's side after Georgia moved in  an attempt to regain control of the breakaway region.
Revised: In August, Russian troops joined on South Ossetia's side after Georgia moved in in an attempt to regain control of the breakaway region.
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Original:  also running are Pascal-Pierre Paillé (Bloc  ), Denis Blanchette ( NDP ), Jean Beaupré (Liberal  ), and Michelle Fontaine (Green  ).
Revised:  also running are Pascal-Pierre Paillé (Bloc ), Denis Blanchette ( New Democratic Party ), Jean Beaupré (Liberal ), and Michelle Fontaine (Green ).
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Original:  also running are Pascal-Pierre Paillé (Bloc  ), Denis Blanchette ( NDP ), Jean Beaupré (Liberal  ), and Michelle Fontaine (Green  ).
Revised:  also running are Pascal-Pierre Paillé (Bloc ), Denis Blanchette ( NDP ), Jean Beaupré (Liberal ), and Michelle Fontaine (Green Party of Canada ).
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Original: In our attempt to speak with as many candidates as possible during the 2008 Canadian federal election, Wikinews has talked via email with Jo-Anne Boulding.
Revised: In Wikinews' attempt to speak with as many candidates as possible during the 2008 Canadian federal election, Wikinews has talked via email with Jo-Anne Boulding.
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Original: BIO OPPONENTS The following is an interview with Mr. Arbour, conducted via email.
Revised: BIO The following is an interview with Mr. Arbour, conducted via email.
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Original:  INTERVIEW Why are you running for political office, why at the federal level, why this party, and why in this riding?
Revised:  Interview Why are you running for political office, why at the federal level, why this party, and why in this riding?
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Original: In an attempt to speak with as many candidates as possible during the  2008 Canadian federal election, Wikinews has talked via email with Paul Arbour.
Revised: In an attempt to speak with as many candidates as possible during the w: 2008 Canadian federal election, Wikinews has talked via email with Paul Arbour.
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Original:  The following is an interview with Mr. Arbour, conducted via email.
Revised:  The following is an interview with Arbour, conducted via email.
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Original:  Vicki is a candidate in Ontario's York—Simcoe riding, running under the Christian Hertiage Party of Canada  banner.
Revised:  Gunn is a candidate in Ontario's York—Simcoe riding, running under the Christian Hertiage Party of Canada banner.
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Original:  Vicki is a candidate in Ontario's York—Simcoe riding, running under the Christian Hertiage Party of Canada  banner.
Revised:  Vicki is a candidate in Ontario's York—Simcoe riding, running under the Christian Heritage Party of Canada banner.
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Original:  The following is an interview with Ms. Gunn, conducted via email.
Revised:  The following is an interview with Gunn, conducted via email.
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Original:  Other methods are quite impersonal but talking to people gives a chance for a real exchange of ideas    
Revised:  Other methods are quite impersonal but talking to people gives a chance for a real exchange of ideas . 
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Original:  Hence clear-cutting, hence goldmine tailings in beautiful rivers, hence irrigation scemes  despoiling wetlands, etc., etc.!
Revised:  Hence clear-cutting, hence goldmine tailings in beautiful rivers, hence irrigation scemes sic despoiling wetlands, etc., etc.!
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Original:  Car emissions levels must be driven by cost-benefit considerations and cannot be dictated in an environment of unceretainty  without, once again, distorting outcomes.
Revised:  Car emissions levels must be driven by cost-benefit considerations and cannot be dictated in an environment of unceretainty sic without, once again, distorting outcomes.
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Original:  The finance ministers of the G7 , who were joined by central bankers , met in Washington, D.C. on Friday to assess the economic and financial situation in the midst of the global financial crisis.
Revised:  The finance ministers of the G7 nations and central bankers met in Washington, D.C. on Friday to assess the economic and financial situation in the midst of the global financial crisis.
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Original:  Beginning with failures of large financial institutions in the United States, the crisis rapidly evolved into a global crisis resulting in a number of European bank failures and sharp reductions in the value of stocks and commodities worldwide.
Revised:  With failures of large financial institutions in the United States, the crisis rapidly evolved into a global crisis resulting in a number of European bank failures and sharp reductions in the value of stocks and commodities worldwide.
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Original:  Beginning with failures of large financial institutions in the United States, the crisis rapidly evolved into a global crisis resulting in a number of European bank failures and sharp reductions in the value of stocks and commodities worldwide.
Revised:  Beginning with failures of large financial institutions in the United States, the crisis rapidly evolved into a global crisis resulting in bank failures in Europe and the Americas, and sharp reductions in the value of stocks and commodities worldwide.
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Original: Todd Palin, her husband, said he had wanted forceful removal of Wooten because of alleged actions such as driving under the influence, threatening Palin's father, and using a Taser gun on his son.
Revised: Todd Palin, her husband, admitted to trying to forcefully remove Wooten because of alleged actions such as driving under the influence, threatening Palin's father, and using a Taser gun on his son.
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Original:  Palin, the investigation found, had "permitted Todd Palin to use the governor's office and the resources of the governor's office, including access to state employees, to continue to contact subordinate state employees in an effort to find some way to get Trooper Wooten fired" .
Revised:  The pressure came after a hostile divorce between the governor's office and the resources of the governor's office, including access to state employees, to continue to contact subordinate state employees in an effort to find some way to get Trooper Wooten fired" .
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Original:  She was well within her rights to fire Monegan because of his refusal to remove Wooten and over disagreement on budget cuts , the panel found .
Revised:  However, she was well within her rights to fire Monegan because of his refusal to remove Wooten and over disagreement on budget cuts , the panel found .
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Original:  She was well within her rights to fire Monegan because of his refusal to remove Wooten and over disagreement on budget cuts , the panel found .
Revised:  She was well within her rights to fire Monegan because of his refusal to remove Wooten and over disagreement on budget cuts .
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Original:  However, she was well within her rights to fire Monegan because of his refusal to remove Wooten and over disagreement on budget cuts.
Revised:  However, she was well within her rights to fire Monegan because of disagreement on budget cuts.
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Original:  Just eighteen people survived the accident   
Revised:  Just eighteen people survived the accident . 
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Original: A preliminary report has been released into the disasterous crash of Spaniar Flight 5022 in Madrid, Spain on August 20, which killed 154.
Revised: A preliminary report has been released into the disastrous crash of Spaniar Flight 5022 in Madrid, Spain on August 20, which killed 154.
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Original:  Video footage from airport security cameras shows the airliner travelling accross an unusually long distance of runway before takeoff .
Revised:  Video footage from airport security cameras shows the airliner travelling across an unusually long distance of runway before takeoff .
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Original:  Video footage from airport security cameras shows the airliner travelling accross an unusually long distance of runway before takeoff .
Revised:  Video footage from airport security cameras shows the airliner travelling accross an unusually long distance of runway before take-off .
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Original:  It failed to maintain altitude and quckly dropped back down at the runway's end, before bursting into a fireball.
Revised:  It failed to maintain altitude and quickly dropped back down at the runway's end, before bursting into a fireball.
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Original:  The tail of the jet struck the ground first, and the Spanish Civil Aviation Accident Investigation Commission (CIAIAC)'s report also notes that the aircraft was carrying 10,130 liters (2,673 gallons) of fuel.
Revised:  The tail of the jet struck the ground first, and the Spanish Civil Aviation Accident Investigation Commission (CIAIAC)'s report also notes that the aircraft was carrying 10,130 litres (2,673 gallons) of fuel.
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Original:  The wing flaps were "fully retracted" at "0 degrees" according to the 12-page report, which also notes that the cockpit voice recrder indicates a complete failure of the take-off warning system (TOWS) - which is supposed to alert pilots attempting to take off in a plane that is not properly configured - to sound prior to the failed ascent.
Revised:  The wing flaps were "fully retracted" at "0 degrees" according to the 12-page report, which also notes that the cockpit voice recorder indicates a complete failure of the take-off warning system (TOWS) - which is supposed to alert pilots attempting to take off in a plane that is not properly configured - to sound prior to the failed ascent.
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Original:  Spaniar checks the TOWS each day and after every change in flight crew, but neither of these occured between the accident flight and the flight before.
Revised:  Spanair checks the TOWS each day and after every change in flight crew, but neither of these occured between the accident flight and the flight before.
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Original:  Spaniar checks the TOWS each day and after every change in flight crew, but neither of these occured between the accident flight and the flight before.
Revised:  Spaniar checks the TOWS each day and after every change in flight crew, but neither of these occurred between the accident flight and the flight before.
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Original:  A seperate judicial investigation also continues
Revised:  A separate judicial investigation also continues
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Original: The man was arrested and charged with assault police.
Revised: The man was arrested and charged with assaulting police.
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