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Original:  Epítome de la conquista del Nuevo Reino de Granada (first published in 1889) , Epítome, 1889, p.82 Elegías de varones ilustres de Indias (De Castellanos, 1589) ., De Castellanos, 1589, p.400 El Carnero (Freyle, 1638) , Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.61 and Historia general de las conquistas del Nuevo Reino de Granada (De Piedrahita, 1676).
Revised:  Epítome de la conquista del Nuevo Reino de Granada (first published in 1889) ; Epítome, 1889, p.82 Elegías de varones ilustres de Indias (De Castellanos, 1589) ., De Castellanos, 1589, p.400 El Carnero (Freyle, 1638) , Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.61 and Historia general de las conquistas del Nuevo Reino de Granada (De Piedrahita, 1676).
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Original:  Epítome de la conquista del Nuevo Reino de Granada (first published in 1889) , Epítome, 1889, p.82 Elegías de varones ilustres de Indias (De Castellanos, 1589) ., De Castellanos, 1589, p.400 El Carnero (Freyle, 1638) , Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.61 and Historia general de las conquistas del Nuevo Reino de Granada (De Piedrahita, 1676).
Revised:  Epítome de la conquista del Nuevo Reino de Granada (first published in 1889) , Epítome, 1889, p.82 Elegías de varones ilustres de Indias (De Castellanos, 1589) ; De Castellanos, 1589, p.400 El Carnero (Freyle, 1638) , Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.61 and Historia general de las conquistas del Nuevo Reino de Granada (De Piedrahita, 1676).
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Original:  Epítome de la conquista del Nuevo Reino de Granada (first published in 1889) , Epítome, 1889, p.82 Elegías de varones ilustres de Indias (De Castellanos, 1589) ., De Castellanos, 1589, p.400 El Carnero (Freyle, 1638) , Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.61 and Historia general de las conquistas del Nuevo Reino de Granada (De Piedrahita, 1676).
Revised:  Epítome de la conquista del Nuevo Reino de Granada (first published in 1889) , Epítome, 1889, p.82 Elegías de varones ilustres de Indias (De Castellanos, 1589) ., De Castellanos, 1589, p.400 El Carnero (Freyle, 1638) ; Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.61 and Historia general de las conquistas del Nuevo Reino de Granada (De Piedrahita, 1676).
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.101 Biography  As a reward for his efforts , Juan del Junco received the encomienda over Cucaita Juan del Junco, in  texts also named  Juan de Junco, was born in Asturias in 1503.
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.101 Biography As a reward for his efforts Juan del Junco received the encomienda over Cucaita Juan del Junco, in texts also named Juan de Junco, was born in Asturias in 1503.
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.101 Biography  As a reward for his efforts , Juan del Junco received the encomienda over Cucaita Juan del Junco, in  texts also named  Juan de Junco, was born in Asturias in 1503.
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.101 Biography As a reward for his efforts , Juan del Junco received the encomienda of Cucaita Juan del Junco, in texts also named Juan de Junco, was born in Asturias in 1503.
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.101 Biography  As a reward for his efforts , Juan del Junco received the encomienda over Cucaita Juan del Junco, in  texts also named  Juan de Junco, was born in Asturias in 1503.
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.101 Biography As a reward for his efforts , Juan del Junco received the encomienda over Cucaita Juan del Junco, in some texts also named Juan de Junco, was born in Asturias in 1503.
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.101 Biography  As a reward for his efforts , Juan del Junco received the encomienda over Cucaita Juan del Junco, in  texts also named  Juan de Junco, was born in Asturias in 1503.
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.101 Biography As a reward for his efforts , Juan del Junco received the encomienda over Cucaita Juan del Junco, in texts also named as Juan de Junco, was born in Asturias in 1503.
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Original:  As his brother, Rodrigo del Junco  who would become governor of La Florida , he was baptised in Ribadesella .
Revised:  He was baptised in Ribadesella; as his brother, Rodrigo del Junco who would become governor of La Florida , he was baptised in Ribadesella .
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Original:  As his brother, Rodrigo del Junco  who would become governor of La Florida , he was baptised in Ribadesella .
Revised:  As his brother, Rodrigo del Junco , who would become governor of La Florida , he was baptised in Ribadesella .
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Original:  As his brother, Rodrigo del Junco  who would become governor of La Florida , he was baptised in Ribadesella .
Revised:  As his brother, Rodrigo del Junco who would become governor of La Florida .
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Original:  La historia de "los trece de la fama" en la isla del Gallo Conquests [[File:Detail Ayllon Map of Diego Ribero 1539.jpg|Del Junco's father-in-law, Lucas Vázquez de Ayllón, is known as the first founder of a European settlement on the American East CoastMap by Diego Ribero, 1539]] The conquest expeditions of Juan del Junco commenced in 1526, when he embarked on a ship leaving Sanlúcar de Barrameda.
Revised:  La historia de "los trece de la fama" en la isla del Gallo American Expeditions [[File:Detail Ayllon Map of Diego Ribero 1539.jpg|Del Junco's father-in-law, Lucas Vázquez de Ayllón, is known as the first founder of a European settlement on the American East CoastMap by Diego Ribero, 1539]] The conquest expeditions of Juan del Junco commenced in 1526, when he embarked on a ship leaving Sanlúcar de Barrameda.
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Original:  La historia de "los trece de la fama" en la isla del Gallo Conquests [[File:Detail Ayllon Map of Diego Ribero 1539.jpg|Del Junco's father-in-law, Lucas Vázquez de Ayllón, is known as the first founder of a European settlement on the American East CoastMap by Diego Ribero, 1539]] The conquest expeditions of Juan del Junco commenced in 1526, when he embarked on a ship leaving Sanlúcar de Barrameda.
Revised:  La historia de "los trece de la fama" en la isla del Gallo Conquests [[File:Detail Ayllon Map of Diego Ribero 1539.jpg|Del Junco's father-in-law, Lucas Vázquez de Ayllón, is known as the first founder of a European settlement on the American east coast.Map by Diego Ribero, 1539]] The conquest expeditions of Juan del Junco commenced in 1526, when he embarked on a ship leaving Sanlúcar de Barrameda.
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Original:  From there , his plan was to travel to the newly founded city of Cartagena, but went to Santa Marta instead to assist Roberto Infante, then governor of the city, arriving in 1535.
Revised:  From there his plan was to travel to the newly founded city of Cartagena, but went to Santa Marta instead to assist Roberto Infante, then governor of the city, arriving in 1535.
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Original:  Conquistadores en el Altiplano Juan del Junco joined the harsh expedition into the Colombian Andes from Santa Marta as a captain, an expedition lead by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada departing April 6 , 1536.
Revised:  Conquistadores en el Altiplano Del Junco joined the harsh expedition into the Colombian Andes from Santa Marta as a captain, an expedition lead by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada departing April 6 , 1536.
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Original:  Conquistadores en el Altiplano Juan del Junco joined the harsh expedition into the Colombian Andes from Santa Marta as a captain, an expedition lead by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada departing April 6 , 1536.
Revised:  Conquistadores en el Altiplano Juan del Junco joined the harsh expedition into the Colombian Andes from Santa Marta as a captain, an expedition led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada departing April 6 , 1536.
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Original:  Conquistadores en el Altiplano Juan del Junco joined the harsh expedition into the Colombian Andes from Santa Marta as a captain, an expedition lead by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada departing April 6 , 1536.
Revised:  Conquistadores en el Altiplano Juan del Junco joined the harsh expedition into the Colombian Andes from Santa Marta as a captain, an expedition lead by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , departing on April6 , 1536.
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Original:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
Revised:  As a captain Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
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Original:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
Revised:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundation of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
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Original:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
Revised:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá on August6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
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Original:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
Revised:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
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Original:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
Revised:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada ; and Tunja on August6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
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Original:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 ), by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
Revised:  As a captain , Del Junco participated in the foundations of Bogotá (August 6 , 1538 ), by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , and Tunja (August 6 , 1539 by Gonzalo Suárez Rendón.
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Original:  He was the first in line to succeed as commander of the province in case of death of Hernán Pérez de Quesada, brother of Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada.
Revised:  He was the next in line to succeed as commander of the province in case of death of Hernán Pérez de Quesada, brother of Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada.
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Original:  He was the first in line to succeed as commander of the province in case of death of Hernán Pérez de Quesada, brother of Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada.
Revised:  He was the first in line to succeed as governor of the province in case of death of Hernán Pérez de Quesada, brother of Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada.
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Original:  He was the first in line to succeed as commander of the province in case of death of Hernán Pérez de Quesada, brother of Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada.
Revised:  He was the first in line to succeed as commander of the province in the event of the death of Hernán Pérez de Quesada, brother of Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada.
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.145Acosta, 1848, p.420 It is said that he spent twenty months in the New Kingdom of Granada and obtained 20,000 pesos of gold from the Muisca  .
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.145Acosta, 1848, p.420 He spent twenty months in the New Kingdom of Granada and obtained 20,000 pesos of gold from the Muisca .
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.145Acosta, 1848, p.420 It is said that he spent twenty months in the New Kingdom of Granada and obtained 20,000 pesos of gold from the Muisca  .
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.145Acosta, 1848, p.420 It is said that he spent twenty months in the New Kingdom of Granada and extorted 20,000 pesos of gold from the Muisca .
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.145Acosta, 1848, p.420 It is said that he spent twenty months in the New Kingdom of Granada and obtained 20,000 pesos of gold from the Muisca  .
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1676, p.145Acosta, 1848, p.420 It is said that he spent twenty months in the New Kingdom of Granada and obtained 20,000 pesos of gold from the Muisca people .
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Original:  Notable caciques he stole the precious resources gold and emeralds from were the caciques  Quiminza, Cucayta, Boyacá, Sora, Sutamanga and Cuqueitagacha.
Revised:  Notable caciques he pillaged gold and emeralds from were the caciques Quiminza, Cucayta, Boyacá, Sora, Sutamanga and Cuqueitagacha.
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Original:  Notable caciques he stole the precious resources gold and emeralds from were the caciques  Quiminza, Cucayta, Boyacá, Sora, Sutamanga and Cuqueitagacha.
Revised:  Notable caciques he stole the precious resources gold and emeralds from were the caciques of Quiminza, Cucayta, Boyacá, Sora, Sutamanga and Cuqueitagacha.
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Original:  Del Junco started his career as  conquistador in the 1526 expedition lead by Sebastian Cabot exploring the Río de la Plata in present-day Argentina.
Revised:  Del Junco started his career as a conquistador in the 1526 expedition lead by Sebastian Cabot exploring the Río de la Plata in present-day Argentina.
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Original:  Del Junco started his career as  conquistador in the 1526 expedition lead by Sebastian Cabot exploring the Río de la Plata in present-day Argentina.
Revised:  Del Junco started his career as conquistador in the 1526 expedition led by Sebastian Cabot exploring the Río de la Plata in present-day Argentina.
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Original:  Del Junco played a role in the foundations of Bogotá (August6, 1538)  and Tunja (August6, 1539).
Revised:  Del Junco played a role in the foundations of Bogotá (August6, 1538) , and Tunja (August6, 1539).
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Original:  Juan del Junco was named in several of the major publications by early chroniclers of the Spanish conquest of Colombia: Epítome de la conquista del Nuevo Reino de Granada (first published in 1889);Epítome, 1889, p.82 Elegías de varones ilustres de Indias (De Castellanos, 1589);De Castellanos, 1589, p.400 El Carnero (Freyle, 1638);Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.61 and Historia general de las conquistas del Nuevo Reino de Granada (De Piedrahita, 1676).
Revised:  Juan del Junco was named by several early chroniclers of the Spanish conquest of Colombia: Epítome de la conquista del Nuevo Reino de Granada (first published in 1889);Epítome, 1889, p.82 Elegías de varones ilustres de Indias (De Castellanos, 1589);De Castellanos, 1589, p.400 El Carnero (Freyle, 1638);Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.61 and Historia general de las conquistas del Nuevo Reino de Granada (De Piedrahita, 1676).
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Original:  as  his brother, Rodrigo del Junco, who would become governor of La Florida.
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Original: De Plaza, 1810, p.61 In 1532 or 1533  taking Hernán Venegas Carrillo with him,Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.75 Del Junco sailed to Santo Domingo, Hispaniola.
Revised: De Plaza, 1810, p.61 In 1532 or 1533 , taking Hernán Venegas Carrillo with him,Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.75 Del Junco sailed to Santo Domingo, Hispaniola.
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Original:  Conquistadores en el Altiplano Del Junco joined the harsh expedition into the Colombian Andes from Santa Marta as a captain , an expedition led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada, departing on April6, 1536.
Revised:  Conquistadores en el Altiplano Del Junco joined the harsh expedition into the Colombian Andes from Santa Marta as a captain in an expedition led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada, departing on April6, 1536.
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Original: Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.103  After the conquest expeditions, captain Del Junco was appointed a Regidor (councillor) of Santa Fe de Bogotá,Acosta, 1848, p.281 and received the encomienda of Cucaita, in the province of Tunja.
Revised: Rodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.103 After the conquest expeditions, captain Del Junco was appointed a regidor (councillor) of Santa Fe de Bogotá,Acosta, 1848, p.281 and received the encomienda of Cucaita, in the province of Tunja.
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Original:  “On Wednesday, June 2, 2021, folks around the world are celebrating the sport by attending group runs, participating in races, tackling Strava challenges, or simply getting out there and logging miles on their own.”
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Original:  It's focus is on making fitness fun, and inspiring kids to embrace running as a way to remain healthy and fit.
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Original: So, Kenneth T. Preah Khan Reach and The Genealogy of Khmer Kings.
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Original:  He was also awarded fellowships by the Brown Foundation and the British Council.
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Original:  > Selected works History of Philosophy Morality and Law Pakistan: Prospects and Perspectives Iqbal Shanasi Islam: Chand Fikri Masail Religious Wisdom Category: 1934 births Category:Living people Category:Muslim philosophers Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani writers Category:Pakistani philosophers Category:People from Rampur, Uttar Pradesh Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:Philosophers of scien
Revised:  > Selected works History of Philosophy Morality and Law Pakistan: Prospects and Perspectives Iqbal Shanasi Islam: Chand Fikri Masail Religious Wisdom Category: 1934 births Category:Living people Category:Muslim philosophers Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani writers Category:Pakistani philosophers Category:People from Rampur, Uttar Pradesh Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:Philosophers of Iqbaliy
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Original:  Student educational records Student educational records, according to the FERPA statue, is defined as "those records, files, documents, and other materials which--(i) contain information directly related to a student;
Revised: Related to the 4th amendment, students expect to have the privacy to learn in their own homes without being monitored by the teacher or by other non-family members. Educational privacy can go beyond privacy of academic records into the privacy of discussing freely topics at school without being judged or notified by a teacher, and the privacy of physical movements around school and within school proximities. Students at different age level and grade level expects different degrees of freedom of expression and privacy. The level of privacy needed by students and educational facilities also vary by school districts, states, geographical locations, and demographics of school population (including teachers, faculties, researchers, students, etc), Student educational records Student educational records, according to the FERPA statue, is defined as "those records, files, documents, and other materials which--(i) contain information directly related to a student;
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Original:  Learning analytics With the improvement of technology, more data has become available within higher education.
Revised: Facebook has pages about schools or groups where students, teachers, and administrations can join. Within these groups and on these pages, privacy could be breached if private information such as social media posts are shared within the consent of certain parties in the picture. Learning analytics With the improvement of technology, more data has become available within higher education.
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Original:  The majority of privacy in education concerns are prevalent to the protection of student data , such as educational records and other personal information , both inside and outside the traditional classroom setting as well as the privacy and confidentiality of medical records.
Revised:  Most privacy in education concerns are prevalent to the protection of student data , such as educational records and other personal information , both inside and outside the traditional classroom setting as well as the privacy and confidentiality of medical records.
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Original:  The majority of privacy in education concerns are prevalent to the protection of student data , such as educational records and other personal information , both inside and outside the traditional classroom setting as well as the privacy and confidentiality of medical records.
Revised:  The majority of privacy in education concerns relate to the protection of student data , such as educational records and other personal information , both inside and outside the traditional classroom setting as well as the privacy and confidentiality of medical records.
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Original:  The majority of privacy in education concerns are prevalent to the protection of student data , such as educational records and other personal information , both inside and outside the traditional classroom setting as well as the privacy and confidentiality of medical records.
Revised:  The majority of privacy in education concerns are prevalent to the protection of student data (like educational records and other personal information , both inside and outside the traditional classroom setting as well as the privacy and confidentiality of medical records.
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Original:  The majority of privacy in education concerns are prevalent to the protection of student data , such as educational records and other personal information , both inside and outside the traditional classroom setting as well as the privacy and confidentiality of medical records.
Revised:  The majority of privacy in education concerns are prevalent to the protection of student data , such as educational records and other personal information ) and the privacy of medical records.
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Original: Student educational records Student educational records, according to the FERPA statue , is defined as "those records, files, documents, and other materials which--(i) contain information directly related to a student;
Revised: Student educational records Student educational records, according to the FERPA statute , is defined as "those records, files, documents, and other materials which--(i) contain information directly related to a student;
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Original: Qaid Mohamed Deriche was a member of the Municipal Council of Ménerville and was assisted by an indigenous council of municipal councilors whose members were Rabah Maref, Dahmane Deriche, Rabah Timizar, Hocine Fazez, Mohamed Amraoui, Lounès Deriche and Ahmed Deriche.
Revised: Qaid Mohamed Deriche was a member of the municipal council of Ménerville and was assisted by an indigenous council of municipal councilors whose members were Rabah Maref, Dahmane Deriche, Rabah Timizar, Hocine Fazez, Mohamed Amraoui, Lounès Deriche and Ahmed Deriche.
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Original:  The Imam khatib who preached this Zawiya was Mohamed Boushaki ( 1876-1950 ), whose uncle Mohamed Seghir Boushaki ( 1869-1959 ) was Sheikh El Ferka of the Aïth Aïcha and a municipal councilor of the town hall of Ménerville.
Revised:  The Imam khatib who preached this Zawiya was Mohamed Boushaki ( 1876–1950 ), whose uncle Mohamed Seghir Boushaki ( 1869-1959 ) was Sheikh El Ferka of the Aïth Aïcha and a municipal councilor of the town hall of Ménerville.
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Original:  The Imam khatib who preached this Zawiya was Mohamed Boushaki ( 1876-1950 ), whose uncle Mohamed Seghir Boushaki ( 1869-1959 ) was Sheikh El Ferka of the Aïth Aïcha and a municipal councilor of the town hall of Ménerville.
Revised:  The Imam khatib who preached this Zawiya was Mohamed Boushaki ( 1876-1950 ), whose uncle Mohamed Seghir Boushaki ( 1869–1959 ) was Sheikh El Ferka of the Aïth Aïcha and a municipal councilor of the town hall of Ménerville.
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