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Original:  They then boarded the Vasaorden, the same royal barge Victoria's parents used in their wedding, and drove through Stockholm's waters flanked by 22 warships and a flyover of 18 fighter jets . Upon reaching the Royal Palace, the couple were greeted by cheers and a choir, before King Carl Gustav gave the traditional fourfold cheers .
Revised:  They then boarded the Vasaorden, the same royal barge Victoria's parents used in their wedding, and drove through Stockholm's waters , accompanied by flyover of 18 fighter jets . Upon reaching the Royal Palace, the couple were greeted by cheers and a choir, before King Carl Gustav gave the traditional fourfold cheers .
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Original:  A wedding banquet for 600 guests followed in the in the Hall of State  . Controversy has surrounded the engagement and wedding between the Crown Princess and Westling, a "commoner".
Revised:  A wedding banquet followed in the in the Hall of State . Controversy has surrounded the engagement and wedding between the Crown Princess and Westling, a "commoner".
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Original:  A wedding banquet for 600 guests followed in the in the Hall of State  . Controversy has surrounded the engagement and wedding between the Crown Princess and Westling, a "commoner".
Revised:  A wedding banquet for 600 guests followed in the in the Hall of State of the Royal Palace . Controversy has surrounded the engagement and wedding between the Crown Princess and Westling, a "commoner".
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Original:  Westling was raised in a middle-class family in Ockelbo,  central Sweden.
Revised:  Westling was raised in a middle-class family in Ockelbo, in central Sweden.
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Original:  His father , Olle Westling, managed a social services centre, and his mother , Ewa, worked in a post office.
Revised:  His father managed a social services centre, and his mother , Ewa, worked in a post office.
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Original:  His father , Olle Westling, managed a social services centre, and his mother , Ewa, worked in a post office.
Revised:  His father , Olle Westling, managed a social services centre, and his mother worked in a post office.
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Original:  She wore the same crown that her mother, Queen Silvia, wore on her wedding day 34 years previously, also on 19 June . Victoria's father, King Carl XVI Gustaf, walked Victoria down the aisle, which was deemed untraditional by many.
Revised:  She wore the same crown that her mother, Queen Silvia, wore on her wedding day 34 years previously, also on June 19. Victoria's father, King Carl XVI Gustaf, walked Victoria down the aisle, which was deemed untraditional by many.
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Original: Westling underwent years of training to prepare for his new role in the royal family, including lessons in etiquette , elocution, and multi-lingual small talk;
Revised: Westling underwent years of training to prepare for his new role in the royal family, including lessons in , elocution, and multi-lingual small talk;
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Original:  Although the actual cause of the crash is still unknown Houston went on to state "the terrain is rugged, the helicopters are often heavily loaded, it’s at high altitude and it was three o’clock in the morning.
Revised:  The crash occurred at 3:39 am today local time (2310 on Sunday, UTC) in the north of Kandahar province. Although the cause is still unknown Houston went on to state "the terrain is rugged, the helicopters are often heavily loaded, it’s at high altitude and it was three o’clock in the morning.
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Original:  Although the actual cause of the crash is still unknown Houston went on to state "the terrain is rugged, the helicopters are often heavily loaded, it’s at high altitude and it was three o’clock in the morning.
Revised:  Although the actual cause of the crash is still unknown , Houston said "the terrain is rugged, the helicopters are often heavily loaded, it’s at high altitude and it was three o’clock in the morning.
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Original:  The Australian Defense Department, however confirmed that enemy fire was not to blame for the crash.
Revised:  The Australian Defence Department, however confirmed that enemy fire was not to blame for the crash.
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Original:  Despite this, Prime Minister Kevin Rudd, remains firm on the issue " " We work beside our allies [...] to avoid Afghanistan once again becoming a breeding ground for terrorists who can then strike at innocent Australians both at home and abroad" and continued by saying that all Australians owe the soldiers a debt of gratitude for making the ultimate sacrifice in the line of duty.
Revised:  Despite this, Prime Minister Kevin Rudd, remains firm on the issue " We work beside our allies [...] to avoid Afghanistan once again becoming a breeding ground for terrorists who can then strike at innocent Australians both at home and abroad" and continued by saying that all Australians owe the soldiers a debt of gratitude for making the ultimate sacrifice in the line of duty.
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Original:  Although the names of the Diggers and American officer have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where  combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a road side blast.
Revised:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a road side blast.
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Original:  Although the names of the Diggers and American officer have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where  combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a road side blast.
Revised:  Although the names of the Diggers and American officer have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast.
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Original:  Less than two weeks after two Australian soldiers (Diggers) died in the explosion of a roadside bomb, three more Australians and an American soldier were killed last night in a helicopter crash in southern Afghanistan – while seven other soldiers are being treated for injuries.
Revised:  Less than two weeks after two Australian soldiers (Diggers) died in the explosion of a roadside bomb, three more Diggers and an American soldier were killed last night in a helicopter crash in southern Afghanistan – while seven other soldiers are being treated for injuries.
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Original:  Australian Defence Force Chief, Angus Houston said in a statement this afternoon that two of the survivors of the helicopter crash are in a serious condition and will be moved with the other survivors to the US military hospital in Begram.
Revised:  Australian Defence Force Chief, Angus Houston said in a statement this afternoon that two of the crash survivors are in a serious condition and will be moved with the other survivors to the US military hospital in Begram.
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Original:  The Australian Defence Department, however confirmed that enemy fire was not to blame for the crash.
Revised:  Houston confirmed that enemy fire was not to blame for the crash.
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Original:  These new casualties in the Afghan War brings Australia's death toll up to 16, while  the USA comes to 1124 since the war began in 2001.
Revised:  These new casualties in the Afghan War brings Australia's death toll up to 16, while that of the USA comes to 1124 since the war began in 2001.
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Original:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast . Related new
Revised:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast Related new
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Original:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast . Related new
Revised:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast . 
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Original: The crash occurred at 3 :39 am today local time ( 2309 on Sunday, UTC) in the north of Kandahar province.
Revised: The crash occurred at 03 :39 am today local time ( 2309 on Sunday, UTC) in the north of Kandahar province.
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Original: The crash occurred at 3 :39 am today local time ( 2309 on Sunday, UTC) in the north of Kandahar province.
Revised: The crash occurred at 3 :39 today local time ( 2309 on Sunday, UTC) in the north of Kandahar province.
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Original:  These new casualties in the Afghan War brings Australia's death toll up to 16 , while that of the USA comes to 1124 since the war began in 2001.
Revised:  These new casualties in the Afghan War brings Australia's death toll to sixteen , while that of the USA comes to 1124 since the war began in 2001.
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Original:  These new casualties in the Afghan War brings Australia's death toll up to 16 , while that of the USA comes to 1124 since the war began in 2001.
Revised:  These new casualties in the Afghan War brings Australia's death toll up to 16 , while that of the US comes to 1124 since the war began in 2001.
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Original:  Despite this, Prime Minister Kevin Rudd, remains firm on the issue  "We work beside our allies [...] to avoid Afghanistan once again becoming a breeding ground for terrorists who can then strike at innocent Australians both at home and abroad" and continued by saying that all Australians owe the soldiers a debt of gratitude for making the ultimate sacrifice in the line of duty.
Revised:  Despite this, Prime Minister Kevin Rudd, remains firm on the issue : "We work beside our allies [...] to avoid Afghanistan once again becoming a breeding ground for terrorists who can then strike at innocent Australians both at home and abroad" and continued by saying that all Australians owe the soldiers a debt of gratitude for making the ultimate sacrifice in the line of duty.
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Original:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith,  26  and Jacob Moerland,  21  were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast
Revised:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith, age 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast
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Original:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith,  26  and Jacob Moerland,  21  were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast
Revised:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 , and Jacob Moerland, 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast
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Original:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith,  26  and Jacob Moerland,  21  were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast
Revised:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, age 21 were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast
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Original:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith,  26  and Jacob Moerland,  21  were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast
Revised:  Although the names of the soldiers have yet to be released, the tragedy follows last week's casualties where Australian combat engineers Darren Smith, 26 and Jacob Moerland, 21 , were killed along side their bomb sniffer dog, Herbie in a roadside blast
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Original: The crashed helicopter carried ten , and one soldier from the US (file photo) Statements did not identify the type of helicopter.
Revised:  Statements did not identify the type of helicopter.
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Original: Image:SWAT Team Utah Rave 6-20-05.jpg|frame|SWAT teams shut down the music.
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Original:  About 90 law enforcement officers from multiple agencies broke up what they said was a rave party on public and private property in the Diamond Fork area of Spanish Fork canyon, an hour outside of Salt Lake City, Utah, at about 11:30 p.m. Saturday (5:30 Sunday UTC).
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Original:  One account from an attendee, identified as "Colby", states:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% frame|A SWAT team officer orders the video-taker to shut off their camera.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% frame|A SWAT team officer orders the video-taker to shut off their camera.
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Original:  External Media Amateur video (MOV format) mirror Amateur video (WMV format) mirror KSL Channel 5 News Report (Realvideo Format
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Original:  An email from Sheriff Jim Tracy stated that dogs and tasers were not used in the raid, however, dogs can clearly be heard barking in the amateur video, and in the infrared helicopter footage released to the media, an officer can be heard saying "Taze the guy on the four wheeler, he's going to get someone hurt!" at 23:38:28 in the video timestamp.
Revised:  An email from Sheriff Jim Tracy stated that dogs and tasers were present at the raid, however, dogs can clearly be heard barking in the amateur video, and in the infrared helicopter footage released to the media, an officer can be heard saying "Taze the guy on the four wheeler, he's going to get someone hurt!" at 23:38:28 in the video timestamp.
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Original:  Prior to raiding the show, several unnamed police informants had reportedly told police that they had observed some "illegal activities". frame|Police clear out the event and question attendees.
Revised:  Prior to raiding the show, several unnamed police informants had reportedly told police that they had observed some "illegal activities". 
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Original:  He added that by the time police arrived "the crowd was about 1,500". frame|Police arrest partygoers.
Revised:  He added that by the time police arrived "the crowd was about 1,500". 
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Original:  Sheriff Jim Tracy stated in an email that both of them were tackled and arrested after assaulting a deputy, however, neither of them are being charged with assaulting a police officer. frame|Police arresting more attendees.
Revised:  Sheriff Jim Tracy stated in an email that both of them were tackled and arrested after assaulting a deputy, however, neither of them are being charged with assaulting a police officer. 
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Original:  "Raves are not the only musical gatherings where drugs are used and distributed," said another. frame|A SWAT team officer orders the video-taker to shut off their camera.
Revised:  "Raves are not the only musical gatherings where drugs are used and distributed," said another. 
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Original:  A friend of mine was forced at gunpoint to put his hands on his head and turn around, because he asked if he could get his things from the tent." frame|An injury allegedly sustained during the raid.
Revised:  A friend of mine was forced at gunpoint to put his hands on his head and turn around, because he asked if he could get his things from the tent." 
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Original:  The attack was discovered by authorities after utilizing an informant's abilities to decipher encoded e-mails.
Revised:  The plot was discovered by authorities after utilizing an informant's abilities to decipher encoded e-mails.
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Original:  The reported attack was to involve the release of sarin gas, a highly toxic substance that the United Nations has classified as a weapon of mass destruction.
Revised:  The reported plan was to involve the release of sarin gas, a highly toxic substance that the United Nations has classified as a weapon of mass destruction.
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Original: Scotland Yard believes it has successfully identified a potential terrorist attack on the British Parliament's House of Commons being planned by  al-Qa'ida  .
Revised: Scotland Yard believes it has successfully identified a potential terrorist attack on the British Parliament's House of Commons being planned by an al-Qa'ida .
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Original: Scotland Yard believes it has successfully identified a potential terrorist attack on the British Parliament's House of Commons being planned by  al-Qa'ida  .
Revised: Scotland Yard believes it has successfully identified a potential terrorist attack on the British Parliament's House of Commons being planned by al-Qa'ida group .
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Original:  The plot was discovered by authorities after utilizing an informant's abilities to decipher encoded e-mails.
Revised:  The plot was discovered by authorities after utilizing an informant's abilities to decipher encrypted e-mails.
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Original:  A special forces team is said to have examined existing security measures and reported that a black cab could be used by suicide bombers to attack, and that a forthcoming Guy Fawkes exhibition could present an opportunity for an attack
Revised:  A special forces team is said to have examined existing security measures and reported that a Black Cab could be used by suicide bombers to attack, and that a forthcoming Guy Fawkes exhibition could present an opportunity for an attack
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Original:  As well as Parliament, the terrorists may also have been targetting the Underground system.
Revised:  As well as Parliament, the terrorists may also have been targeting the Underground system.
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Original:  In addition to six Australians, including one of the country's richest men, Ken Talbot , there were two British, two French, and one US citizen on board the plane.
Revised:  In addition to six Australians, including one of the country's richest men, , there were two British, two French, and one US citizen on board the plane.
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Original:  Another Sundance official said that although significant, the crash would not "mortally wound" the company  
Revised:  Another Sundance official said that although significant, the crash would not "mortally wound" the company . 
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Original:  Another Sundance official said that although significant, the crash would not "mortally wound" the company  
Revised:  Another Sundance official said that although significant, the crash would not "mortally wound" the company Sister link
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Original: The Democratic Party has been stirring up some controversy by proposing a revision of the 2012 constitutional package regarding the universal suffrage in Hong Kong, which the local government as well as the National People's Congress  accepted.
Revised: The Democratic Party has been stirring up some controversy by proposing a revision of the 2012 constitutional package regarding the universal suffrage in Hong Kong, which the local government as well as the National People's Congress , accepted.
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Original:  ' The decision is not just a historical one for the Democratic Party, but also a milestone for the city's progress in democracy, ' said the Party chairman Albert Ho.
Revised:  " The decision is not just a historical one for the Democratic Party, but also a milestone for the city's progress in democracy, ' said the Party chairman Albert Ho.
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Original:  ' The decision is not just a historical one for the Democratic Party, but also a milestone for the city's progress in democracy, ' said the Party chairman Albert Ho.
Revised:  ' The decision is not just a historical one for the Democratic Party, but also a milestone for the city's progress in democracy, " said the Party chairman Albert Ho.
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Original:  The Executive Council also approved the proposal, and the Chief Executive of Hong Kong, Donald Tsang said there is a ' ray of hope ' for the democratic development of Hong Kong as a result.
Revised:  The Executive Council also approved the proposal, and the Chief Executive of Hong Kong, Donald Tsang said there is a " ray of hope ' for the democratic development of Hong Kong as a result.
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Original:  The Executive Council also approved the proposal, and the Chief Executive of Hong Kong, Donald Tsang said there is a ' ray of hope ' for the democratic development of Hong Kong as a result.
Revised:  The Executive Council also approved the proposal, and the Chief Executive of Hong Kong, Donald Tsang said there is a ' ray of hope " for the democratic development of Hong Kong as a result.
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Original:  According to Ming Pao, the decision also improved the chances of Xi Jinping's becoming the next president.
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Original:  The stepped onto a roasted pigeon, symbolising the Democratic Party as the Party's logo included a dove.
Revised:  They stepped onto a roasted pigeon, symbolising the Democratic Party as the Party's logo included a dove.
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Original:  They waved placards with the names of seven of the party's lawmakers and condemned them for being 'democratic sinners'.
Revised:  They waved placards with the names of seven of the party's lawmakers and condemned them for being "democracy sinners."
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Original:  The Party had earlier protested when Ho participated in the City Forum and during a meeting of the Alliance for Universial Suffrage.
Revised:  The Party had also protested when Ho participated in the City Forum and during a meeting of the Alliance for Universial Suffrage.
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Original:  Even after Franklin Wong rescued Ho and put him in his car, some 'Brothers of Victoria Park' still surrounded the car, and police officers had to protect Ho so that he could leave.
Revised:  Police officers had to protect Ho so that he could leave.
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Original:  Ho comforted himself by saying that, 'when extreme leftists and rightists attack you, you know that are in the right track'.
Revised:  Ho said that, 'when extreme leftists and rightists attack you, you know that are in the right track'.
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Original: The  Executive Council also approved the proposal, and the Chief Executive of Hong Kong, Donald Tsang said there is a " ray of hope " for the democratic development of Hong Kong as a result.
Revised: The Executive Council also approved the proposal, and the Chief Executive of Hong Kong, Donald Tsang said there is a ' ray of hope " for the democratic development of Hong Kong as a result.
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Original: The  Executive Council also approved the proposal, and the Chief Executive of Hong Kong, Donald Tsang said there is a " ray of hope " for the democratic development of Hong Kong as a result.
Revised: The Executive Council also approved the proposal, and the Chief Executive of Hong Kong, Donald Tsang said there is a " ray of hope ' for the democratic development of Hong Kong as a result.
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