wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  He is regarded as one of Europe ’ s finest jazz pianists, covering the full spectrum of jazz styles from his early days of Boogie-woogie to Chicago traditional Jazz, swing and contemporary jazz.
Revised:  He is regarded as one of Europe ' s finest jazz pianists, covering the full spectrum of jazz styles from his early days of Boogie-woogie to Chicago traditional Jazz, swing and contemporary jazz.
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Original:  Later career On November 17 , 1996 Agerbeek celebrated his 40 years jubilee as an allround jazz pianist when he was presented with the membership of honour of the Hague Jazz Club.
Revised:  Later career On 17 , 1996 Agerbeek celebrated his 40 years jubilee as an allround jazz pianist when he was presented with the membership of honour of the Hague Jazz Club.
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Original:  Boogie On The Move as The Grand Piano Boogie Train: Jaap Dekker, Rob Hoeke and Rob Agerbeek, Rodero Records, 1997 Blues & Boogie Movin' On as The Grand Piano Boogie Train: Jaap Dekker, Rob Hoeke and Rob Agerbeek, Rodero Records, 1997 Three of a Kind, as Rob Agerbeek, Oldie Blues, 1998 That's all, as Ann Burton & Mark Murphy meet the Rob Agerbeek Trio, Blue Jack Jazz Records, 2004 Pardon My Bop, as Rob Agerbeek/Ruud Brink Quartet, Blue Jack Jazz Records, 2004 Homerun -
Revised:  Boogie on the Move as The Grand Piano Boogie Train: Jaap Dekker, Rob Hoeke and Rob Agerbeek, Rodero Records, 1997 Blues & Boogie Movin' On as The Grand Piano Boogie Train: Jaap Dekker, Rob Hoeke and Rob Agerbeek, Rodero Records, 1997 Three of a Kind, as Rob Agerbeek, Oldie Blues, 1998 That's all, as Ann Burton & Mark Murphy meet the Rob Agerbeek Trio, Blue Jack Jazz Records, 2004 Pardon My Bop, as Rob Agerbeek/Ruud Brink Quartet, Blue Jack Jazz Records, 2004 Homerun -
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Original:  Boogie On The Move as The Grand Piano Boogie Train: Jaap Dekker, Rob Hoeke and Rob Agerbeek, Rodero Records, 1997 Blues & Boogie Movin' On as The Grand Piano Boogie Train: Jaap Dekker, Rob Hoeke and Rob Agerbeek, Rodero Records, 1997 Three of a Kind, as Rob Agerbeek, Oldie Blues, 1998 That's all, as Ann Burton & Mark Murphy meet the Rob Agerbeek Trio, Blue Jack Jazz Records, 2004 Pardon My Bop, as Rob Agerbeek/Ruud Brink Quartet, Blue Jack Jazz Records, 2004 Homerun -
Revised:  Boogie On The Move as The Grand Piano Boogie Train: Jaap Dekker, Rob Hoeke and Rob Agerbeek, Rodero Records, 1997 Blues & Boogie Movin' On as The Grand Piano Boogie Train: Jaap Dekker, Rob Hoeke and Rob Agerbeek, Rodero Records, 1997 Three of a Kind, as Rob Agerbeek, Oldie Blues, 1998 That's all, as Ann Burton & Mark Murphy meet the Rob Agerbeek Trio, Blue Jack Jazz Records, 2004 Pardon My Bop, as Rob Agerbeek/Ruud Brink Quartet, Blue Jack Jazz Records, 2004 Homerun –
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Original: Astrology consists of a number of belief systems that hold that there is a relationship between astronomical phenomena and events or descriptions of personality in the human world.
Revised: Astrology consists of a number of belief systems that hold that there is a relationship between astronomical phenomena and event or descriptions of personality in the human world.
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Original: Astrology consists of a number of belief systems that hold that there is a relationship between astronomical phenomena and event or descriptions of personality in the human world.
Revised: Astrology consists of a number of belief systems that hold that there is a relationship between astronomical phenomena and events or descriptions of personality in the human world.
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Original:  Modern scientific inquiry into astrology is primarily focused on drawing a correlation between astrological traditions and the influence of seasonal birth in humans .
Revised:  ASTROLOGY IT'S TRUE .
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Original: Theoretic obstacles Beyond the scientific tests astrology has failed, proposals for astrology face a number of other obstacles due to the many theoretical flaws in astrology including lack of consistency, lack of ability to predict missing planets, lack of any connection of the zodiac to the constellations  , and lack of any plausible mechanism.
Revised: Theoretic obstacles Beyond the scientific tests astrology has failed, proposals for astrology face a number of other obstacles due to the many theoretical flaws in astrology including lack of consistency, lack of ability to predict missing planets, lack of connection of the zodiac to the constellations , and lack of any plausible mechanism.
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Original:  Modern scientific inquiry into astrology is primarily focused on drawing a correlation between astrological traditions and the influence of seasonal birth in humans .
Revised:  traditions .
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Original:  Mercury 2 439 ±1 Venus 6 052 ±6 Earth 6 378.140 ±0.005 Mars 3 397.2 ±1 Jupiter 71 398 Saturn 60 000 Uranus 25 400 Neptune 24 300 Pluto 2 500 Moon 1 738 Moon's disk, ratio to Earth's equatorial radius k = 0.272 5076 ae IAU(1982) , ibidem, Resolution No. C 10 Sun 696 000
Revised:  Mercury 2 439 ±1 Venus 6 052 ±6 Earth 6 378.140 ±0.005 Mars 3 397.2 ±1 Jupiter 71 398 Saturn 60 000 Uranus 25 400 Neptune 24 300 Pluto 2 500 Moon 1 738 Moon's disk, ratio to Earth's equatorial radius k = 0.272 5076 ae IAU(1982) ibidem, Resolution No. C 10 Sun 696 000
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Original: Rudolf Battěk ( November 2 , 1924 – March 17 , 2013) was a Czech sociologist, politician, and political dissident during Czechoslovakia Communist era.
Revised: Rudolf Battěk ( 2 , 1924 – March 17 , 2013) was a Czech sociologist, politician, and political dissident during Czechoslovakia Communist era.
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Original: Rudolf Battěk ( November 2 , 1924 – March 17 , 2013) was a Czech sociologist, politician, and political dissident during Czechoslovakia Communist era.
Revised: Rudolf Battěk ( November 2 , 1924 – 17 , 2013) was a Czech sociologist, politician, and political dissident during Czechoslovakia Communist era.
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Original:  Rudolf Battěk died on March 17 , 2013, at the age of 88.
Revised:  Rudolf Battěk died on 17 , 2013, at the age of 88.
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Original: History and Organization The American Association for the Advancement of Science established a collaboration with Stanford University Libraries and The Center for Resource Economics/Island Press (Island Press) in 1996 to find means to utilize internet-based technologies to enhance access to scientific information and improve the effectiveness of information transfer.
Revised: History and organization The American Association for the Advancement of Science established a collaboration with Stanford University Libraries and The Center for Resource Economics/Island Press (Island Press) in 1996 to find means to utilize internet-based technologies to enhance access to scientific information and improve the effectiveness of information transfer.
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Original: In his later years, Roy Fagen suffered from advanced Alzheimer's diseaand passed away at the age of 84 in Hobart in 1990.
Revised: In his later years, Fagan suffered from advanced Alzheimer's diseaand passed away at the age of 84 in Hobart in 1990.
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Original: In his later years, Roy Fagen suffered from advanced Alzheimer's diseaand passed away at the age of 84 in Hobart in 1990.
Revised: In his later years, Roy Fagen suffered from advanced Alzheimer's disease and passed away at the age of 84 in Hobart in 1990.
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Original:  The Roy Fagen  mental health facility in Lenah Valley, Hobart is a dedicated to older persons with psychiatric illness and/or cognitive impairment, and is named after him.
Revised:  The Roy Fagen Centre is a mental health facility in Lenah Valley, Hobart is a dedicated to older persons with psychiatric illness and/or cognitive impairment, and is named after him.
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Original:  The Roy Fagen  mental health facility in Lenah Valley, Hobart is a dedicated to older persons with psychiatric illness and/or cognitive impairment, and is named after him.
Revised:  The Roy Fagen mental health facility in Lenah Valley, Hobart dedicated to older persons with psychiatric illness and/or cognitive impairment, and is named after him.
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Original:  The Roy Fagen Centre is a mental health facility in Lenah Valley, Hobart dedicated to older persons with psychiatric illness and/or cognitive impairment, and is named after him.
Revised:  The Roy Fagan Centre is a mental health facility in Lenah Valley, Hobart dedicated to older persons with psychiatric illness and/or cognitive impairment, and is named after him.
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Original:  For off-path travel  should be multiplied by 3/5, for horseback by 5/4.
Revised:  For off-path travel , this value should be multiplied by 3/5, for horseback by 5/4.
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Original:  For Tobler's hiking function it can be calculated from the following its conversion:
Revised:  For Tobler's hiking function it can be calculated from the following conversion:
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Original: 300px|Tobler's hiking function - walking speed vs. slope angle chart.
Revised: 300px|Tobler's hiking function – walking speed vs. slope angle chart.
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Original:  The velocity on the flat terrain is 5 km / h, the maximum speed of 6 km / h is achieved roughly at -2.86 °.
Revised:  The velocity on the flat terrain is 5 km / h, the maximum speed of 6 km / h is achieved roughly at −2.86 °.
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Original: 15 -0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 -10 -0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 -5 -0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 -2.8624 -0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
Revised: 15 -0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 −10 −0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 -5 -0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 -2.8624 -0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
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Original: 15 -0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 -10 -0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 -5 -0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 -2.8624 -0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
Revised: 15 -0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 -10 -0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 −5 −0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 -2.8624 -0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
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Original: 15 -0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 -10 -0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 -5 -0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 -2.8624 -0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
Revised: 15 -0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 -10 -0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 -5 -0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 −2.8624 −0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
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Original: / m −60 −1.73 
Revised: / m -60 -1.73 
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Original: −50 −1.19 0.11 
Revised: -50 -1.19 0.11 
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Original: −40 −0.84 0.38 
Revised: -40 -0.84 0.38 
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Original: −30 −0.58 0.95 
Revised: -30 -0.58 0.95 
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Original: 3.80 −25 −0.47 
Revised: 3.80 -25 -0.47 
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Original: 1.24 30.0 48.3 1.80 −15 −0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 −10 −0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 −5 −0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 −2.8624 −0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
Revised: 1.24 30.0 48.3 1.80 -15 -0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 −10 −0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 −5 −0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 −2.8624 −0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
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Original: 1.24 30.0 48.3 1.80 −15 −0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 −10 −0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 −5 −0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 −2.8624 −0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
Revised: 1.24 30.0 48.3 1.80 −15 −0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 -10 -0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 −5 −0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 −2.8624 −0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
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Original: 1.24 30.0 48.3 1.80 −15 −0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 −10 −0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 −5 −0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 −2.8624 −0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
Revised: 1.24 30.0 48.3 1.80 −15 −0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 −10 −0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 -5 -0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 −2.8624 −0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
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Original: 1.24 30.0 48.3 1.80 −15 −0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 −10 −0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 −5 −0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 −2.8624 −0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
Revised: 1.24 30.0 48.3 1.80 −15 −0.27 2.80 1.74 21.4 34.5 1.29 −10 −0.18 3.86 2.40 15.6 25.0 0.93 −5 −0.09 5.26 3.27 11.4 18.3 0.68 -2.8624 -0.05 6.00 3.73 10.0 16.1 0.60 0 0 5.04 3.13 11.9 19.2 0.71 1 0.02 4.74 2.94 12.7 20.4 0.76 5 0.09 3.71 2.30 16.2 26.0 0.97 10 0.18 2.72 1.69 22.1 35.5 1.32 15 0.27 1.97 1.23 30.4 49.0 1.83 20 0.36 1.41 0.88 42.6 68.5 2.56 25 0.47 0.98 0.61 60.9 98.1 3.66 30 0.58 0.67 0.41 89.9 144.6 5.39 40 0.84 0.27 0.17 224.6 361.5 13.48 50 1.19 0.08 0.05 771.8 1242.1 46.31
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Original: Wāman Bāpuji Metre (वामन बापूजी मेत्रे) ( 14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), admiringly referred to as Dādā ('Elder Brother'in Bengali and Marathi ) Metre in the Indian oil industry circles, was the doyen of Indian petroleum geologists .
Revised: Waman Bapuji Metre ( 14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), admiringly referred to as Dādā ('Elder Brother'in Bengali and Marathi ) Metre in the Indian oil industry circles, was the doyen of Indian petroleum geologists .
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Original: Wāman Bāpuji Metre (वामन बापूजी मेत्रे) ( 14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), admiringly referred to as Dādā ('Elder Brother'in Bengali and Marathi ) Metre in the Indian oil industry circles, was the doyen of Indian petroleum geologists .
Revised: Wāman Bāpuji Metre (वामन बापूजी मेत्रे) ( 14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), sometimes referred to in the Indian oil industry as Dada (meaning Elder brother Metre in the Bengali and Marathi ) Metre in the Indian oil industry circles, was the doyen of Indian petroleum geologists .
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Original: Wāman Bāpuji Metre (वामन बापूजी मेत्रे) ( 14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), admiringly referred to as Dādā ('Elder Brother'in Bengali and Marathi ) Metre in the Indian oil industry circles, was the doyen of Indian petroleum geologists .
Revised: Wāman Bāpuji Metre (वामन बापूजी मेत्रे) ( 14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), admiringly referred to as Dādā ('Elder Brother'in Bengali and Marathi languages), was an Indian petroleum geologist .
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Original:  For his life-time pioneering contribution to petroleum exploration and development in India and for his ' significant contribution to the growth of the oil industry in the country ' , he was awarded the Padma Bhushan in 1968, the highest of the civilian awards conferred to date by the President of Indiaon any professional in the fields of mining, petroleum exploration or production.
Revised:  For his " significant contribution to the growth of the oil industry in the country ' , he was awarded the Padma Bhushan in 1968, the highest of the civilian awards conferred to date by the President of Indiaon any professional in the fields of mining, petroleum exploration or production.
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Original:  For his life-time pioneering contribution to petroleum exploration and development in India and for his ' significant contribution to the growth of the oil industry in the country ' , he was awarded the Padma Bhushan in 1968, the highest of the civilian awards conferred to date by the President of Indiaon any professional in the fields of mining, petroleum exploration or production.
Revised:  For his life-time pioneering contribution to petroleum exploration and development in India and for his ' significant contribution to the growth of the oil industry in the country " , he was awarded the Padma Bhushan in 1968, the highest of the civilian awards conferred to date by the President of Indiaon any professional in the fields of mining, petroleum exploration or production.
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Original:  For his life-time pioneering contribution to petroleum exploration and development in India and for his ' significant contribution to the growth of the oil industry in the country ' , he was awarded the Padma Bhushan in 1968, the highest of the civilian awards conferred to date by the President of Indiaon any professional in the fields of mining, petroleum exploration or production.
Revised:  For his life-time pioneering contribution to petroleum exploration and development in India and for his ' significant contribution to the growth of the oil industry in the country ' , he was awarded 
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Original:  Forty Years of Contribution to Oil Industry of South Asia%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Pioneering work in India, Burma and Pakistan W. B. Metre joined Assam Oil Company Ltd. (AOC), a wholly owned subsidiary of Burmah Oil Company Ltd. (BOC), at Digboi in upper Assam as a geologist in 1930 immediately after graduation.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Pioneering work in India, Burma and Pakistan W. B. Metre joined Assam Oil Company Ltd. (AOC), a wholly owned subsidiary of Burmah Oil Company Ltd. (BOC), at Digboi in upper Assam as a geologist in 1930 immediately after graduation.
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Original:  At the Dawn of Oil India%DIFDELCMD < & %%% ONGC In 1959, Oil India Private Ltd. was formed as a partnership between the Government of India and the BOC with the latter holding two-thirds of the shares.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% ONGC In 1959, Oil India Private Ltd. was formed as a partnership between the Government of India and the BOC with the latter holding two-thirds of the shares.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1968, he was awarded Padma Bhushan, one of the highest civilian awards in India and highest such civilian award conferred by President of India on a professional involved in oil and gas exploration.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1968, he was awarded Padma Bhushan, in 1968.
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Original:  Children Nalini Metre, Arun Metre, Asha Hadole, Ravi Metre, Usha Chaujer, Sheila Vir, Sudha Tewari, Kshama Metre -recipient Padma Shri in 2008, Pramode Metre, Vinod Metre and Anil Metre.
Revised:  Nalini Metre, Arun Metre, Asha Hadole, Ravi Metre, Usha Chaujer, Sheila Vir, Sudha Tewari, Kshama Metre -recipient Padma Shri in 2008, Pramode Metre, Vinod Metre and Anil Metre.
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Original:  Children Nalini Metre, Arun Metre, Asha Hadole, Ravi Metre, Usha Chaujer, Sheila Vir, Sudha Tewari, Kshama Metre -recipient Padma Shri in 2008, Pramode Metre, Vinod Metre and Anil Metre.
Revised:  Children 
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Waman Bapuji Metre (14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), sometimes referred to in the Indian oil industry as Dada (meaning Elder brother Metre in the Bengali and Marathi languages ), was an Indian petroleum geologist.
Revised: Waman Bapuji Metre (14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), sometimes referred to in the Indian oil industry as Dada (meaning Elder brother Metre in Marathi language ), was an Indian petroleum geologist.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Waman Bapuji Metre (14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), sometimes referred to in the Indian oil industry as Dada (meaning Elder brother Metre in Marathi language), was an Indian petroleum geologist.
Revised: Waman Bapuji Metre (14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), known as Dada (meaning Elder brother Metre in Marathi language), was an Indian petroleum geologist.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Waman Bapuji Metre (14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), sometimes referred to in the Indian oil industry as Dada (meaning Elder brother Metre in Marathi language), was an Indian petroleum geologist.
Revised: Waman Bapuji Metre (14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), sometimes referred to in the Indian oil industry as Dada (meaning Elder brother in Marathi language), was an Indian petroleum geologist.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Waman Bapuji Metre ( 14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), known as Dada (meaning Elder brother in Marathi language), was an Indian petroleum geologist.
Revised: Waman Bapuji Metre ( 14 February 1906 – 21 November 1970), admiringly referred to as Dādā (meaning Elder brother in Marathi language), was an Indian petroleum geologist.
Edit intent: clarity