wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  New Zealand 24–12 Loosehead prop 29 August 1981 Athletic Park, Wellington4.
Revised:  New Zealand 24–12 Loosehead prop 29 August 1981 Athletic Park, Wellington 4.
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Original:  New Zealand 22–25 Loosehead prop 12 September 1981 Eden Park, Auckland 5. USA Rugby 38–7 Loosehead prop 20 September 1981 Owl Creek Polo ground, Glenville, New York6.
Revised:  New Zealand 22–25 Loosehead prop 12 September 1981 Eden Park, Auckland 5. 38–7 Loosehead prop 20 September 1981 Owl Creek Polo ground, Glenville, New York6.
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Original:  South American Jaguars 50–18 Loosehead prop 1 27 March 1982 Loftus Versveld, Pretoria 7.  South American Jaguars 12–21 Loosehead prop 3 April 1982 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein 8. England 33–15 Loosehead prop 2 June 1984 Boet Erasmus, Port Elizabeth9.
Revised:  South American Jaguars 50–18 Loosehead prop 1 27 March 1982 Loftus Versveld, Pretoria 7. South American Jaguars 12–21 Loosehead prop 3 April 1982 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein 8. 33–15 Loosehead prop 2 June 1984 Boet Erasmus, Port Elizabeth9.
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Original:  South American Jaguars 50–18 Loosehead prop 1 27 March 1982 Loftus Versveld, Pretoria 7.  South American Jaguars 12–21 Loosehead prop 3 April 1982 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein 8. England 33–15 Loosehead prop 2 June 1984 Boet Erasmus, Port Elizabeth9.
Revised:  South American Jaguars 50–18 Loosehead prop 1 27 March 1982 Loftus Versveld, Pretoria 7. South American Jaguars 12–21 Loosehead prop 3 April 1982 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein 8. England 33–15 Loosehead prop 2 June 1984 Boet Erasmus, Port Elizabeth 9.
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Original: Lodewikus Theodorus "Theo" Oosthuizen (born 24 February 1964 in Mossel Bay, South Africa ) is a former South African rugby player .
Revised: Lodewikus Theodorus "Theo" Oosthuizen (born 24 February 1964 ) is a former South African rugby player .
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Original:  He never played in a test match , but played for South Africa  in four tour matches  .
Revised:  He never played in a test match for South Africa in four tour matches .
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Original:  He never played in a test match , but played for South Africa  in four tour matches  .
Revised:  He never played in a test match , but played for South Africa , but played in four tour matches .
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Original: Sole custody has been the traditional  form of child custody after divorce;
Revised: Sole custody has been the traditional History Historically, sole custody was the most common form of child custody after divorce;
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Original:  however, there has been a trend since the 1980s towards joint physical custody with shared parenting , as research has shown that such arrangements are more favorable to the physical, mental and social well-being of children .
Revised:  however, there has been a trend since the 1980s , joint physical custody with shared parenting , as research has shown that such arrangements are more favorable to the physical, mental and social well-being of children .
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Original:  While the child /children are with the parent, that parent retains sole authority over the child /children . Bird's nest custody is an arrangement whereby the parents go back and forth from a residence in which the child/ children reside, placing the burden of upheaval and movement on the parents rather than the child/ children.
Revised:  While a child is with the parent, that parent retains sole authority over the child /children . Bird's nest custody is an arrangement whereby the parents go back and forth from a residence in which the child/ children reside, placing the burden of upheaval and movement on the parents rather than the child/ children.
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Original:  While the child /children are with the parent, that parent retains sole authority over the child /children . Bird's nest custody is an arrangement whereby the parents go back and forth from a residence in which the child/ children reside, placing the burden of upheaval and movement on the parents rather than the child/ children.
Revised:  While the child /children are with the parent, that parent retains sole authority over the child . Bird's nest custody is an arrangement whereby the parents go back and forth from a residence in which the child/ children reside, placing the burden of upheaval and movement on the parents rather than the child/ children.
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Original:  While the child /children are with the parent, that parent retains sole authority over the child /children . Bird's nest custody is an arrangement whereby the parents go back and forth from a residence in which the child/ children reside, placing the burden of upheaval and movement on the parents rather than the child/ children.
Revised:  While the child /children are with the parent, that parent retains sole authority over the child /children . Bird's nest custody is an arrangement whereby the parents go back and forth from a residence in which the children reside, placing the burden of upheaval and movement on the parents rather than the child/ children.
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Original:  While the child /children are with the parent, that parent retains sole authority over the child /children . Bird's nest custody is an arrangement whereby the parents go back and forth from a residence in which the child/ children reside, placing the burden of upheaval and movement on the parents rather than the child/ children.
Revised:  While the child /children are with the parent, that parent retains sole authority over the child /children . Bird's nest custody is an arrangement whereby the parents go back and forth from a residence in which the child/ children reside, placing the burden of upheaval and movement on the parents rather than the children.
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Original:  See also Child custody Divorce Family law Family court Parens patriae Parenting plan Shared parenting  Ward of the state
Revised:  Child custody Divorce Family law Family court Parens patriae Parenting plan Shared parenting Ward of the state
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Original: See, e.g., Monday, 22 March 2021
Revised: See, e.g., 
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Original:  Generally speaking, third-party custody occurs when one of two options occur: The biological parents do not want custody of the child/  children.
Revised:  Generally speaking, third-party custody occurs when one of two options occur: The biological parents do not want custody of the child/ . children.
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Original:  Deliberate deserting /abandonment of the child/children.
Revised:  Deliberate desertion /abandonment of the child/children.
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Original: In some custody situations, it is possible that the child/children will not remain with either of their natural, biological, parents, but instead custody is awarded to a third person . Generally speaking, third-party custody occurs when one of two options occur:  The biological parents do not want custody of the child/children.
Revised: In some custody situations, it is possible that the child/children will not remain with either of their natural, biological, parents, but instead custody is awarded to a third person Generally speaking, third-party custody occurs when one of two options occur: The biological parents do not want custody of the child/children.
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Original: In some custody situations, it is possible that the child/children will not remain with either of their natural, biological, parents, but instead custody is awarded to a third person . Generally speaking, third-party custody occurs when one of two options occur:  The biological parents do not want custody of the child/children.
Revised: In some custody situations, it is possible that the child/children will not remain with either of their natural, biological, parents, but instead custody is awarded to a third person . Generally speaking, third-party custody occurs when one of two options occur: . The biological parents do not want custody of the child/children.
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Original:  She is the daughter of Indonesian actress, Fanny Bauty and Indonesian actor, Mark Sungkar.
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Original: Lorcan Dempsey (1999) may have introduced the term into popular use in library and information science, although others, such as Joan Schwarz, used it earlier.
Revised: Lorcan Dempsey may have introduced the term into popular use in library and information science, although others, such as Joan Schwarz, used it earlier.
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Original: Michael Buckland (2012) wrote, " p%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% rogress can be made towards a coherent, unified view of the roles of archives, libraries, museums, online information services, and related organizations if they are treated as information-providing services."
Revised:  p%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% rogress can be made towards a coherent, unified view of the roles of archives, libraries, museums, online information services, and related organizations if they are treated as information-providing services."
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Original: Michael Buckland (2012) wrote, " p%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% rogress can be made towards a coherent, unified view of the roles of archives, libraries, museums, online information services, and related organizations if they are treated as information-providing services."
Revised: Michael Buckland (2012) wrote, " %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% rogress can be made towards a coherent, unified view of the roles of archives, libraries, museums, online information services, and related organizations if they are treated as information-providing services."
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Original: Michael Buckland (2012) wrote, " p%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% rogress can be made towards a coherent, unified view of the roles of archives, libraries, museums, online information services, and related organizations if they are treated as information-providing services."
Revised: Michael Buckland (2012) wrote, " p%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 
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Original: A memory institution is an organization maintaining a repository of public knowledge, a generic term used about institutions such as libraries, archives, museums, sites and monuments records (SMR) , clearinghouses,  providers of digital libraries and data aggregation services which serve as memories for given societies or mankind.
Revised: A memory institution is an organization maintaining a repository of public knowledge, a generic term used about institutions such as libraries, archives, heritage (monuments providers of digital libraries and data aggregation services which serve as memories for given societies or mankind.
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Original:   Increasingly such institutions are considered as a part of a unified documentation / information science perspective.
Revised:  Memory institutions serve the purpose of documenting, contextualizing, preserving and indexing elements of human culture and collective memory. These institutions allow and enable society to better understand themselves, their past, and how the past impacts their future. These repositories are ultimately preservers of communities, languages, cultures, customs, tribes, and individuality. Memory institutions are repositories of knowledge, while also being actors of the transitions of knowledge and memory to the community. These institutions ultimately remain some form of collective memory. Increasingly such institutions are considered as a part of a unified documentation / information science perspective.
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Original:   Increasingly such institutions are considered as a part of a unified documentation / information science perspective.
Revised:  Increasingly such institutions are considered as a part of a unified documentation and information science perspective.
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Original:   Lorcan Dempsey may have introduced the term into popular use in library and information science, although others, such as Joan Schwarz, used it earlier.
Revised:  Archives are repositories that collect, organize, preserve, and allow for access to the institution’s primary source materials which include letters, reports, accounts, minute books, photographs, and manuscripts of the government, businesses, and members of the community. Most archival collections include permanent and valuable records of historical and evidential value. Archives fall in line with memory institutions because they provide surrogates for collective human memory. Archives collect materials to help communities, institutions, nations to better understand themselves, their past, understand the present and prepare for the future. Libraries are defined as a collection of resources that are made available to the community in the form of print materials such as books and periodicals by information professionals. Beyond books and periodicals, libraries also offer a variety of services and programs to the community in which they serve with the goal of educating and advancing society. Museums are a place where objects that contain permanent historical and cultural value such as works of art, three-dimensional objects, and scientific specimens. Museum can be characterized as historical, scientific, art institutions, heritage institutions, aquaria and arboreta, and zoological and botanical gardens. Lorcan Dempsey may have introduced the term into popular use in library and information science, although others, such as Joan Schwarz, used it earlier.
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Original:  in the public sector and the academy oversimplifies the concept of memory, and marginalises domain-specific approaches to the cataloguing, description, interpretation and deployment of collections that lead museums, libraries and archives to engage with history, meaning and memory in significantly different ways."   
Revised:  in the public sector and the academy oversimplifies the concept of memory, and marginalises domain-specific approaches to the cataloguing, description, interpretation and deployment of collections that lead museums, libraries and archives to engage with history, meaning and memory in significantly different ways." The primary goals of memory institutions are to preserve and document the memory of society, but also to allow open access to collections. In the digital age, memory institutions are faced with the task of digitizing their analogue collections as well as taking in born digital materials. Digitization is the process of transforming analogue materials into a digital format primarily for storage and use on a computer. Digitization in memory institutions allows for great access to the repositories’ collections at any time and from anywhere around the world. The digitization of collections in memory institutions assists with preservations concerns. With collections being made available online, the materials are faced with less abuse from being handled regularly. Another important factor with digitization is that it can decentralize and democratize memory institutions and social remembering practices. 
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Original:  in the public sector and the academy oversimplifies the concept of memory, and marginalises domain-specific approaches to the cataloguing, description, interpretation and deployment of collections that lead museums, libraries and archives to engage with history, meaning and memory in significantly different ways."   
Revised:  in the public sector and the academy oversimplifies the concept of memory, and marginalises domain-specific approaches to the cataloguing, description, interpretation and deployment of collections that lead museums, libraries and archives to engage with history, meaning and memory in significantly different ways." While there are several positive aspects when digitizing collections in memory intuitions there are some cons to consider. One of strains on digitization for memory institutions is the cost that has to be considered. Digital collections will still need maintenance and updated as technology and software changes. The institutions’ staff have to be properly trained to deal with digitization and changing technologies. Digitization projects can take a lot of time, money, and resources from institutions that are already lacking these things. Having collections available online will lead to reduced access and engagement to the physical collection, which the user might prefer. Memory institutions also need to consider the legal ramifications such as copyright and data protection. Ethics and privacy concerns with digital collections also need to be considered. There is also a fear that people will not come to the memory institutions because they can do their research or gain their knowledge from their online presence.
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Original:  Among C.K. Ra's contemporaries who were based in Trivandrum include, his disciple Chirayinkil Sreekantan Nair, G. Rajendran and B.D. Dethan , N.Divakaran all of whom were the former students of the Trivandrum School of Arts and the self-taught painter and novelist Malayattoor Ramakrishnan.
Revised:  Among C.K. Ra's contemporaries who were based in Trivandrum include, his disciple Chirayinkil Sreekantan Nair, G. Rajendran , B.D. Dethan , N.Divakaran all of whom were the former students of the Trivandrum School of Arts and the self-taught painter and novelist Malayattoor Ramakrishnan.
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Original:  Among C.K. Ra's contemporaries who were based in Trivandrum include, his disciple Chirayinkil Sreekantan Nair, G. Rajendran and B.D. Dethan , N.Divakaran all of whom were the former students of the Trivandrum School of Arts and the self-taught painter and novelist Malayattoor Ramakrishnan.
Revised:  Among C.K. Ra's contemporaries who were based in Trivandrum include, his disciple Chirayinkil Sreekantan Nair, G. Rajendran and B.D. Dethan and N.Divakaran all of whom were the former students of the Trivandrum School of Arts and the self-taught painter and novelist Malayattoor Ramakrishnan.
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Original: King Razadarit of Hanthawaddy Ava's first kings believed that Ava was the rightful successor to Pagan, and would try to restore the empire.
Revised: King Razadarit of Hanthawaddy Ava's first kings believed that Ava was the Pagan Empire’s rightful successor, and attempted to restore the empire.
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Original:  In 1385, Ava looked south where the throne of Hanthawaddy Pegu had just been filled by a 16-year-old Razadarit, and launched a war that would go on for another 40 years.
Revised:  In 1385, Ava looked south where the throne of Hanthawaddy Pegu had just been taken by a 16-year-old Razadarit, and launched a war that would go on for another 40 years.
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Original:  In 1385, Ava looked south where the throne of Hanthawaddy Pegu had just been filled by a 16-year-old Razadarit, and launched a war that would go on for another 40 years.
Revised:  In 1385, Ava looked south where the throne of Hanthawaddy Pegu had just been filled by a 16-year-old Razadarit, who launched a war that would go on for another 40 years.
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Original:  But  in the early 15th century when Ava's new king Minkhaung I was facing multiple rebellions, Razadarit invaded the upcountry with a large naval force.
Revised:  But then in the early 15th century when Ava's new king Minkhaung I was facing multiple rebellions, Razadarit invaded the upcountry with a large naval force.
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Original:  But  in the early 15th century when Ava's new king Minkhaung I was facing multiple rebellions, Razadarit invaded the upcountry with a large naval force.
Revised:  But in the early 15th century , Ava's new king Minkhaung I was facing multiple rebellions, Razadarit invaded the upcountry with a large naval force.
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Original:  But  in the early 15th century when Ava's new king Minkhaung I was facing multiple rebellions, Razadarit invaded the upcountry with a large naval force.
Revised:  But in the early 15th century when Ava's new king Minkhaung I faced multiple rebellions. Razadarit took this as an opportunity to invade the upcountry with a large naval force.
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Original:  It proved too much for Pegu as it could not get Ava to get too strong.
Revised:  It proved too much for Pegu as it could not let Ava get too strong.
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Original:  It was the premier military force in the 16th century when Toungoo kings built the largest empire in the history of Southeast Asia.
Revised:  It was the premier military force in the 16th century when the Toungoo Dynasty built the largest empire in the history of Southeast Asia.
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Original:  Eighth-century Chinese records identify 18 Pyu states throughout the Irrawadddy valley , and describe the Pyu as a humane and peaceful people to whom  war was virtually unknown and who wore silk cotton instead of actually silk so that they would not have to kill silk worms .
Revised:  Eighth-century Chinese records identify 18 Pyu states throughout the Irrawaddy valley and describe the Pyu as a humane and peaceful people to whom war was virtually unknown and who wore silk cotton instead of actually silk so that they would not have to kill silk worms .
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Original:  Eighth-century Chinese records identify 18 Pyu states throughout the Irrawadddy valley , and describe the Pyu as a humane and peaceful people to whom  war was virtually unknown and who wore silk cotton instead of actually silk so that they would not have to kill silk worms .
Revised:  Eighth-century Chinese records identify 18 Pyu states throughout the Irrawadddy valley , and describe the Pyu as a humane and peaceful people to whom the war was virtually unknown and who wore silk cotton instead of actually silk so that they would not have to kill silk worms .
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Original:  Eighth-century Chinese records identify 18 Pyu states throughout the Irrawadddy valley , and describe the Pyu as a humane and peaceful people to whom  war was virtually unknown and who wore silk cotton instead of actually silk so that they would not have to kill silk worms .
Revised:  Eighth-century Chinese records identify 18 Pyu states throughout the Irrawadddy valley , and describe the Pyu as a humane and peaceful people to whom war was virtually unknown and who wore silk cotton instead of actually silk so that they would not have to kill silkworms .
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Original:  The earliest extant record of warfare in the Pyu realm is the early 9th century when the Pyu states came under constant attacks by the armies of the Kingdom of Nanzhao (from present-day Yunnan).
Revised:  The earliest extant record of warfare in the Pyu realm in the early 9th century when the Pyu states came under constant attacks by the armies of the Kingdom of Nanzhao (from present-day Yunnan).
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Original:  commander-in-chief of Ava Army (1410–1415) during Forty Years' War Emuntaya: Commando officer of Hanthawaddy Army during Forty Years' War Mingyi Yan Naung: commander of Ava Kingdom, who declined the throne of Ava after the assassination of Thohanbwa Smim Payu: First Admiral of the Royal Burmese Navy Binnya Dala , Commander-in-chief, First Toungoo Empire Binnya Law Maha Thiha Thura: member of 68 comrades, commander-in-chief of Konbaung Dynasty during Sino -
Revised:  commander-in-chief of Ava Army (1410–1415) during Forty Years' War Emuntaya: Commando officer of Hanthawaddy Army during Forty Years' War Mingyi Yan Naung: commander of Ava Kingdom, who declined the throne of Ava after the assassination of Thohanbwa Smim Payu: First Admiral of the Royal Burmese Navy Binnya Dala : Commander-in-chief, First Toungoo Empire Binnya Law Maha Thiha Thura: member of 68 comrades, commander-in-chief of Konbaung Dynasty during Sino -
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Original:  In the 18th and early 19th centuries, highly militaristic Konbaung kings had built the largest empire in mainland Southeast Asia until they ran into the British in present-day northeast India.
Revised:  In the 18th and early 19th centuries, highly militaristic Konbaung kings had built the largest empire in mainland Southeast Asia until they encountered the British in present-day northeast India.
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