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Original: Rosenblatt Stadium, home of the College World Series since 1950 The final round of the 2009 College World Series of baseball is set, with eight teams qualifying for the double-elimination tournament.
Revised:  The final round of the 2009 College World Series of baseball is set, with eight teams qualifying for the double-elimination tournament.
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Original:  The College World Series is the final leg of a 2009 NCAA Division I Baseball Tournament which determines the top baseball team in the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) Division I , which is the top level of play in American college athletics.
Revised:  The College World Series is the final leg of a 2009 NCAA Division I Baseball Tournament which determines the top baseball team in the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) Division I — the top level of play in American college athletics.
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Original:   The initial field of 64 teams played through regional competition in the first two legs of the tournament, called the "Regionals" and "Super Regionals ".
Revised:  The initial field of 64 teams played through regional competition in the first two legs of the tournament, called the "Regionals" and "Super Regionals ."
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Original:  Play will continue in the form of a double-elimination tournament, culminating in a three game championship series to be held on June 22-24.
Revised:  Play will continue in the form of a double-elimination tournament, culminating in a three-game championship series to be held on June 22-24.
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Original:  Play will continue in the form of a double-elimination tournament, culminating in a three game championship series to be held on June 22-24.
Revised:  Play will continue in the form of a double-elimination tournament, culminating in a three game championship series to be held June 22–24.
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Original:  Of the eight teams in the College World Series this year, two are making their CWS debut , Virginia and Southern Miss.
Revised:  Of the eight teams in the College World Series this year, two are making their CWS debut : Virginia and Southern Miss.
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Original:  Last years champion, Fresno State University, did not make it out of the Regionals this year, and only UNC and LSU are returning from last year's final 8
Revised:  Last year's champion, Fresno State University, did not make it out of the Regionals this year, and only UNC and LSU are returning from last year's final 8
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Original:  Rosenblatt Stadium, home of the College World Series since 1950 The initial field of 64 teams played through regional competition in the first two legs of the tournament, called the "Regionals" and "Super Regionals."
Revised:  The initial field of 64 teams played through regional competition in the first two legs of the tournament, called the "Regionals" and "Super Regionals."
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Original:  Rosenblatt Stadium, home of the College World Series since 1950 Of the eight teams in the College World Series this year, two are making their CWS debut: Virginia and Southern Miss.
Revised:  Of the eight teams in the College World Series this year, two are making their CWS debut: Virginia and Southern Miss.
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Original:  Arizona State from the Pacific-10 Conference Arkansas from the Southeastrn Conference California State University, Fullerton from the Big West Conference Louisiana State University (LSU) from the Southeastern Conference University of North Carolina (UNC) from the Atlantic Coast Conference University of Southern Mississippi from Conference USA University of Texas from the Big 12 Conference University of Virginia from the Atlantic Coast Conference
Revised:  Arizona State from the Pacific-10 Conference Arkansas from the Southeastern Conference California State University, Fullerton from the Big West Conference Louisiana State University (LSU) from the Southeastern Conference University of North Carolina (UNC) from the Atlantic Coast Conference University of Southern Mississippi from Conference USA University of Texas from the Big 12 Conference University of Virginia from the Atlantic Coast Conference
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Original:  In winning the cup, the Penguins became the first team in 38 years to win a Stanley Cup Finals game seven while playing on the road  
Revised:  In winning the cup, the Penguins became the first team in 38 years to win a Stanley Cup Finals game seven while playing on the road . 
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Original: Max Talbot (PIT) Friday, the Pittsburgh Penguins defeated the Detroit Red Wings in game seven of the 2009 Stanely Cup Finals to win their third Stanley Cup.
Revised: Max Talbot (PIT) Friday, the Pittsburgh Penguins defeated the Detroit Red Wings in game seven of the 2009 Stanley Cup Finals to win their third Stanley Cup.
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Original: Max Talbot (PIT)  Friday, the Pittsburgh Penguins defeated the Detroit Red Wings in game seven of the 2009 Stanley Cup Finals to win their third Stanley Cup.
Revised: Max Talbot (PIT) On Friday, the Pittsburgh Penguins defeated the Detroit Red Wings in game seven of the 2009 Stanley Cup Finals to win their third Stanley Cup.
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Original:  The Pengiuns rolled the Carolina Hurricanes in a four game sweep to win the Eastern Conference title.
Revised:  The Penguins rolled the Carolina Hurricanes in a four game sweep to win the Eastern Conference title.
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Original:  After a scoreless first period, Pittburg 's Max Talbot scored on an assist from Evgeni Malkin only 1:13 into the second period.
Revised:  After a scoreless first period, Pittsburgh 's Max Talbot scored on an assist from Evgeni Malkin only 1:13 into the second period.
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Original:  The second round series against the Washington Capitals featured a highly-touted individual matchup, as the Penguins young star Sydney Crosby matched skills against Alexander Ovechkin of the Capitals;
Revised:  The second round series against the Washington Capitals featured a highly-touted individual matchup, as the Penguins young star Sidney Crosby matched skills against Alexander Ovechkin of the Capitals;
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Original:  The Penguins young star, Sydney Crosby had little impact on this game;
Revised:  The Penguins young star, Sidney Crosby had little impact on this game;
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Original:  Talbot added to his first goal with a second at the 10:07 mark in the second period, on assists from Chris Kunitz and w: Rob Scuderi.
Revised:  Talbot added to his first goal with a second at the 10:07 mark in the second period, on assists from Chris Kunitz and Rob Scuderi.
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Original: This Stanely Cup run was not an easy one for the Penguins.
Revised: This Stanley Cup run was not an easy one for the Penguins.
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Original: David Wood, an undertaker from Middlesbrough, England, received a six month prison sentence, suspended for one year, yesterday for stealing the keys of a competitor's hearse.
Revised: David Wood, an undertaker from Middlesbrough, England, received a six month suspended prison sentence yesterday for stealing the keys of a competitor's hearse.
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Original:  He did it because he believed Joel D Kerr, the undertaker whose keys were stolen, had taken some of his business.
Revised:  He did it because he believed Joel D Kerr, the undertaker whose keys were stolen, had poached some of his business.
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Original:  Wood's barrister, Peter Makepeace, apologised on behalf of his client and pointed  that since the case was reported, Wood's business has suffered.
Revised:  Wood's barrister, Peter Makepeace, apologised on behalf of his client and pointed out that since the case was reported, Wood's business has suffered.
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Original:  Wood  did not comment.
Revised:  Wood himself did not comment.
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Original:  In addition to his suspended sentence, Wood was ordered to pay £250 (US$410) costsand a compensation hearing will occur at a later date.
Revised:  In addition to his suspended sentence, Wood was ordered to pay £250 costs. A compensation hearing will occur at a later date.
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Original:  The keys, which Wood threw in his flight, have yet to be found
Revised:  The keys, which Wood lost in his flight, have yet to be found
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Original: Protestors chanting "Death to the dictator!" occupied major streets around Tehran, with roadblocks being set up against police.
Revised: Protesters chanting "Death to the dictator!" occupied major streets around Tehran, with roadblocks being set up against police.
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Original:  The protestors , reports say, do not seek to overthrow the Islamic regime in place since 1979 in the country , but instead to reform it.
Revised:  The protesters , reports say, do not seek to overthrow the Islamic regime in place since 1979 in the country , but instead to reform it.
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Original:  The protestors , reports say, do not seek to overthrow the Islamic regime in place since 1979 in the country , but instead to reform it.
Revised:  The protestors , reports say, do not seek to overthrow the Islamic regime in place since 1979 , but instead to reform it.
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Original:  Mr Ahmadinejad would not guarantee the safety of his opponents.
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Original:  Reporters Without Borders has said that the Iranian government has instituted mass censorship, with foreign journalists being asked to leave the country and an interpreter working with an Italian news crew  beaten by police.
Revised:  Reporters Without Borders has said that the Iranian government has instituted mass censorship, with foreign journalists being asked to leave the country and an interpreter working with an Italian news crew was beaten by police.
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Original:  Iranians living abroad as well as supporters of what is being called the "green revolution", from the colors of Mousavi's campaign, have staged demonstrations outside Iranian embassies and consulates in Rome, Kuala Lumpur, Paris, Berlin, London, and the Hague, with events planned in Chicago and Los Angeles  for later in the day
Revised:  Iranians living abroad as well as supporters of what is being called the "green revolution", from the colors of Mousavi's campaign, have staged demonstrations outside Iranian embassies and consulates in Rome, Kuala Lumpur, Paris, Berlin, London, and The Hague, with events planned in Chicago and Los Angeles for later in the day
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Original:  Demonstrations took place late into the night, with waves of police fighting protestors in Tehran, Shiraz, Mashad and fuirtRasht .
Revised:  Demonstrations took place late into the night, with waves of police fighting protestors in Tehran, Shiraz, Mashad and Rasht .
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Original:  U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton said that she hopes "genuine will and desire" of the people will reflect the results of the election  
Revised:  U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton said that she hopes "genuine will and desire" of the people will reflect the results of the election . 
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Original:  However, the brother of former Iranian president and reformist Mohammad Khateimi 's brother detained.
Revised:  However, the brother of former Iranian president and reformist Mohammad Khateimi has been detained.
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Original: Mir Hossein Mousavi (right)  At least one person has been shot and killed and several others were seriously wounded during a rally where hundreds of thousands of people were demonstrating against the re-election of President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad.
Revised: Mir Hossein Mousavi (right) . At least one person has been shot and killed and several others were seriously wounded during a rally where hundreds of thousands of people were demonstrating against the re-election of President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad.
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Original:  In the past few days there have been reports of violence and rioting, with many people arrested  
Revised:  In the past few days there have been reports of violence and rioting, with many people arrested . 
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Original:  Mir Hossein Mousavi (right).
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Original: The defeated candidate, Mir Hossein Mousavi  appeared at the rally and addressed the crowd earlier in the day, in contravention of a ban.
Revised: The defeated candidate, Mir Hossein Mousavi , appeared at the rally and addressed the crowd earlier in the day, in contravention of a ban.
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Original:  Unconfirmed reports say that at least one person has been shot and killed  and several others were seriously wounded  during a rally where hundreds of thousands of people were demonstrating in Azadi Square in Tehran, Iran against the re-election of President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad  .
Revised:  Unconfirmed reports say that at least one person has been shot and killed , and several others were seriously wounded during a rally where hundreds of thousands of people were demonstrating in Azadi Square in Tehran, Iran against the re-election of President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad .
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Original:  Unconfirmed reports say that at least one person has been shot and killed  and several others were seriously wounded  during a rally where hundreds of thousands of people were demonstrating in Azadi Square in Tehran, Iran against the re-election of President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad  .
Revised:  Unconfirmed reports say that at least one person has been shot and killed and several others were seriously wounded , during a rally where hundreds of thousands of people were demonstrating in Azadi Square in Tehran, Iran against the re-election of President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad .
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Original:  Unconfirmed reports say that at least one person has been shot and killed  and several others were seriously wounded  during a rally where hundreds of thousands of people were demonstrating in Azadi Square in Tehran, Iran against the re-election of President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad  .
Revised:  Unconfirmed reports say that at least one person has been shot and killed and several others were seriously wounded during a rally against the re-election of President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad .
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Original: Map of the UK colour coded by severity of H1N1 outbreak, as of 14 June.
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Original:  An online petition started by "Theo Karantsalis" with the title: "Fire Oklahoma Highway Patrolman Daniel Martin" has so far received over three thousand signatures.
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Original:  Ayatollah Ali Khamenei, the supreme ruler of Iran has announced there will be an investigation into possible voting fraud, after various countries, including the USA and the EU expressed discomfort with the way the election had been handled.
Revised:  Ayatollah Ali Khamenei, the supreme ruler of Iran has announced there will be an investigation into possible voting fraud, after various countries, including the United States and the European Union, expressed discomfort with the way the election had been handled.
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Original:  Iran's top legislative body has said votes would be recounted in areas contested by other losing candidates  , however a spokesman said they are not willing to annul the election.
Revised:  Iran's top legislative body has said votes would be recounted in regions where other losing candidates , however a spokesman said they are not willing to annul the election.
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Original:  Iran's top legislative body has said votes would be recounted in regions where other losing candidates contest the results, however a spokesman said they are not willing to annul the election   .
Revised:  Iran's top legislative body has said votes would be recounted in regions where other losing candidates contest the results, but the Council says they have no plans to annul the election .
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Original:  Iran's top legislative body has said votes would be recounted in regions where other losing candidates contest the results, however a spokesman said they are not willing to annul the election   .
Revised:  Iran's top legislative body has said votes would be recounted in regions where other losing candidates contest the results, however a spokesman said they are not willing to annul the election . .
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Original: Candidates opposing the current president elect, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad made the official request of a recount saying they believe thousands of ballots went missing.
Revised: Candidates opposing the current president elect, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad made the official request for a recount saying they believe thousands of ballots went missing.
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Original:  One example example are male fruit flies.
Revised:  One example are male fruit flies.
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Original:  Lead scientist on the study  Nathan Bailey, says the list includes, among others, dolphins, penguins, frogs and birds.
Revised:  Lead scientist on the study , Nathan Bailey, says the list includes, among others, dolphins, penguins, frogs and birds.
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Original: According to a recent study, almost every kind of animal on Earth engages in homosexual behavior whether intentional or natural.
Revised: According to a recent study, almost every kind of animal on Earth engages in same-sex sexual behavior whether intentional or natural.
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Original:  In some cases the animals are not aware that they are engaging in same-sex tendencies .
Revised:  In some cases the animals are not aware that they are engaging in same-sex sexual behaviors .
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Original:  Bottle nose dolphins have also been known to sometimes engage in homosexual behavior as a way to socially bond with other dolphins.
Revised:  Bottle nose dolphins have also been known to sometimes engage in sex-sex sexual behavior as a way to socially bond with other dolphins.
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Original:  Bailey also said that natural selection could be playing a role in what animals engage in homosexual behavior.
Revised:  Bailey also said that natural selection could be playing a role in what animals engage in same-sex sexual behavior.
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Original:  Bottle nose dolphins have also been known to sometimes engage in sex-sex sexual behavior as a way to socially bond with other dolphins.
Revised:  Bottle nose dolphins have also been known to sometimes engage in same-sex sexual behavior as a way to socially bond with other dolphins.
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Original:  The missing six are believed to consist of five germans , of whom three are children and a Briton.
Revised:  The missing six are believed to consist of five Germans , of whom three are children and a Briton.
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Original:  On Saturday, June 13, at the Klafthmonos (Κλαυθμωνος) square in Athens, Greece, the Athens Pride 2009 was held in support of LGBT issues.
Revised: Athens Pride 2009. On Saturday, June 13, at the Klafthmonos (Κλαυθμωνος) square in Athens, Greece, the Athens Pride 2009 was held in support of LGBT issues.
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Original:  Shown here is a picture gallery of the event  
Revised:  Shown here is a picture gallery of the event . 
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Original:  This Greek gay pride festival was held under the slogan "100\% ισοτητα" or "100\% equity ." On the square, organisations had stands representing issues such as representatives from human rights organizations, AIDS related health organizations, LGBT groups and political parties supporting LGBT rights.
Revised:  This Greek gay pride festival was held under the slogan "100\% ισοτητα" or "100\% equality ." On the square, organisations had stands representing issues such as representatives from human rights organizations, AIDS related health organizations, LGBT groups and political parties supporting LGBT rights.
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Original:  This Greek gay pride festival was held under the slogan "100\% ισοτητα " or "100\% equality."
Revised:  This Greek gay pride festival was held under the slogan "100\% ισότητα " or "100\% equality."
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Original: The South Korean President said that North Korea's actions will not go well with their country and the U.S. South Korea president said the U.S. would help them from any North Korean attacks . Category:U.
Revised: The South Korean President said that North Korea's actions will not go well with their country and the U.S. South Korea president said the U.S. would help them from any North Korean attacks Category:U.
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Original:  U.S. President Barack Obama called on North Korea as being a "grave threat" in their nuclear weapons producing .
Revised: US President, Barack Obama U.S. President Barack Obama called on North Korea as being a "grave threat" in their nuclear weapons producing .
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Original:  U.S. President Barack Obama called on North Korea as being a "grave threat" in their nuclear weapons producing .
Revised:  U.S. President Barack Obama today branded North Korea a "grave threat" in their nuclear weapons producing .
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Original:  U.S. President Barack Obama called on North Korea as being a "grave threat" in their nuclear weapons producing .
Revised:  U.S. President Barack Obama called on North Korea as being a "grave threat" with regards to their nuclear weapons producing .
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Original:  U.S. President Barack Obama called on North Korea as being a "grave threat" in their nuclear weapons producing .
Revised:  U.S. President Barack Obama called on North Korea as being a "grave threat" in their nuclear weapons production .
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Original:  Also  at the Pentagon officials have said North Korean missiles could hit the U.S. in the next three years if they continue to grow in weapons .
Revised:  Also , at the Pentagon officials have said North Korean missiles could hit the U.S. in the next three years if they continue to grow in weapons .
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Original:  The South Korean President said that North Korea's actions will not go well with their country and the U.S. South Korea president said the U.S. would help them from any North Korean attacks
Revised:  The South Korean President said that North Korea's actions would not go unheeded and that South Korea had the support of the USA
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Original: US President , Barack Obama U.S. President Barack Obama today branded North Korea a "grave threat"  with regards to their nuclear weapons production.
Revised: US President , Barack Obama U.S. President Barack Obama branded North Korea a "grave threat" with regards to their nuclear weapons production.
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Original:  Obama said that these actions were worrying other nations and that the USA might be willing to negotiate.
Revised:  Obama said that these actions were worrying other nations and that the United States might be willing to negotiate.
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Original:  Also, at the Pentagon officials have said North Korean missiles could hit the U.S. in the next three years if they continue military expansion as they have in the past year.
Revised:  Officials at the Pentagon officials have said North Korean missiles could hit the U.S. in the next three years if they continue military expansion as they have in the past year.
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Original:  Also, at the Pentagon officials have said North Korean missiles could hit the U.S. in the next three years if they continue military expansion as they have in the past year.
Revised:  Also, at the Pentagon have said North Korean missiles could hit the U.S. in the next three years if they continue military expansion as they have in the past year.
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Original:  Also, at the Pentagon officials have said North Korean missiles could hit the U.S. in the next three years if they continue military expansion as they have in the past year.
Revised:  Also, at the Pentagon officials have said North Korean missiles could hit the US in the next three years if they continue military expansion as they have in the past year.
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