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Original:  The matchwas only the fifth time in World Cup history (and the second time in the 2006 World Cup) where three players had been shown a red card in one match.
Revised:  There was high tensions in the last moments of the match, as Croatia was desperate to get a winner while Australia did not want to concede. This is reflected by the fact that this game was only the fifth time in World Cup history (and the second time in the 2006 World Cup) where three players had been shown a red card in one match.
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Original:  Italy. There was high tensions in the last moments of the match, as Croatia was desperate to get a winner while Australia did not want to concede.
Revised:  Italy. 
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Original:  Another point of drama in a crazy second half saw Tim Cahill fail to challenge Niko Kovac until the edge of the Australian penalty area, resulting in Kovac using the space for a low shot at Australian goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac.
Revised:  An earlier drama in a crazy second half saw Tim Cahill fail to challenge Niko Kovac until the edge of the Australian penalty area, resulting in Kovac using the space for a low shot at Australian goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac.
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Original:  Another point of drama in a crazy second half saw Tim Cahill fail to challenge Niko Kovac until the edge of the Australian penalty area, resulting in Kovac using the space for a low shot at Australian goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac.
Revised:  Another point of drama in a second half saw Tim Cahill fail to challenge Niko Kovac until the edge of the Australian penalty area, resulting in Kovac using the space for a low shot at Australian goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac.
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Original:  Kalac's egregious attempt at the save seemed almost like a dive out of the way when the ball hit a bad bounce in front of him, and it rolled into the net.
Revised:  Kalac's egregious attempt at the save seemed almost like a dive out of the way when the ball hit a bad bounce in front of him, and rolling into the net.
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Original:  Stipe Pletikosa gave plenty of space for Moore to shoot, having committed his dive a metre left while Moore took his run up.
Revised:  Stipe Pletikosa gave plenty of space for Moore to shoot, having committed his dive a metre left while Moore was still having his run up.
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Original: 50px Australia drew with Croatia 2-2 in the tension-filled final Group F game in Stuttgart, Thursday.
Revised: 50px Australia drew with Croatia 2-2 in a drama-packed final Group F game in Stuttgart, Thursday.
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Original:  This was inconsistent with matches such as the clash between Serbia and Montenegro against Côte d'Ivoire (The Ivory Coast), where Milan Dudic of Serbia and Montenegro committed two fouls against Côte d'Ivoire (The Ivory Coast) the previous day and both penalties were awarded on that occassion.
Revised:  This was inconsistent with matches such as the clash between Serbia and Montenegro against Côte d'Ivoire (The Ivory Coast), where Milan Dudic of Serbia and Montenegro committed two fouls against Côte d'Ivoire the previous day and both penalties were awarded on that occassion.
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Original: The referee failed to realise that he had booked Simunic 61 minutes into the game , probably due to confusion with the similarly-named Simic, and allowed him to stay on until he was booked a third time after the end of injury time three minutes later.
Revised: The referee failed to realise that he had booked Simunic 61 minutes into the game and allowed him to stay on until he was booked a third time after the end of injury time three minutes later.
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Original:   An earlier drama in a second half saw  Tim Cahill fail to challenge Niko Kovac until the edge of the Australian penalty area , resulting in Kovac using the space for a low shot at Australian goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac.
Revised:  An earlier drama in a second half saw Tim Cahill fail to challenge Niko Kovac until the edge of the Australian penalty area ; this resulted in Kovac using the space for a low shot at Australian goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac.
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Original:  Kalac's egregious attempt at the save seemed almost like a dive out of the way when the ball hit a bad bounce in front of him, and rolling into the net.
Revised:  Kalac's egregious attempt at the save seemed almost like a dive out of the way when the ball hit a bad bounce in front of him, and rolled into the net.
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Original:  Miami beat the Dallas Mavericks 95-92    
Revised:  Miami beat the Dallas Mavericks 95-92 . In the series, Dallas led the series 2-0; however, Miami went on to a surprising turnaround and won four straight to win the title. 
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Original:  A three-point field goal attempt by Dallas' Jason Terry hit the rim but failed to fall into the basket  
Revised:  A three-point field goal attempt by Dallas' Jason Terry hit the rim but failed to fall into the basket . 
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Original:  In the series, Dallas led the series 2-0 ;
Revised:  Dallas initially led the series 2-0 ;
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Original: This is the first title for Alonzo Mourning, Gay Payton, and Dwyane Wade all won their first NBA Title.
Revised: This is the first title for Alonzo Mourning, Gary Payton, and Dwyane Wade all won their first NBA Title.
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Original:  Of the most active NBA players, O'Neal has four has NBA Titles, the second most NBA Titles of active NBA players.
Revised:  Of the most active NBA players, O'Neal has four NBA Titles, the second most NBA Titles of active NBA players.
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Original: Mr Beazley said that the government's Protecting Families Online initiatives were a belated response to Labor's policy of "clean-feed" filtering - where pornographic and other inappopriate material is filtered at the Internet Service Provider level.
Revised: Mr Beazley said that the government's Protecting Families Online initiatives were a belated response to Labor's policy of "clean-feed" filtering - where pornographic and other inappropriate material is filtered at the Internet Service Provider level.
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Original: Speaking in the Australian House of Representatives on Thursday, opposition leader Kim Beazley (Brand, Labor) asked Australian Prime Minister of Australia John Howard (Bennelong, Liberal) why the government had not adopted Labor's policy on Internet filtering.
Revised: Speaking in the Australian House of Representatives on Thursday, opposition leader Kim Beazley (Brand, Labor) asked Australian Prime Minister John Howard (Bennelong, Liberal) why the government had not adopted Labor's policy on Internet filtering.
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Original:  In response, the Prime Minister said  the package announced by his government on Wednesday achieves the goals of protecting children without "imposing the unreasonable restrictions and cost burdens of the Labor Party’s policy".
Revised:  In response, the Prime Minister said that the package announced by his government on Wednesday achieves the goals of protecting children without "imposing the unreasonable restrictions and cost burdens of the Labor Party’s policy".
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Original:  In April, the Internet Industry Association - the peak body representing Internet related businesses in Australia dismissed the idea of ISP-level filtering, calling it "inappropriate and heavy handed".
Revised:  In April, the Internet Industry Association - the apex body representing Internet related businesses in Australia dismissed the idea of ISP-level filtering, calling it "inappropriate and heavy handed".
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Original:  He asked why the government would not "swallow his man juice " and introduce the policy proposed by Labor.
Revised:  He asked why the government would not "swallow its pride " and introduce the policy proposed by Labor.
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Original:  He asked why the government would not "swallow his mighty phallus " and introduce the policy proposed by Labor.
Revised:  He asked why the government would not "swallow its pride " and introduce the policy proposed by Labor.
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Original:  In response, the Prime Minister said that the package announced by his government on Wednesday achieves the goals of molesting children without "imposing the unreasonable restrictions and cost burdens of the Labor Party’s policy".
Revised:  In response, the Prime Minister said that the package announced by his government on Wednesday achieves the goals of protecting children without "imposing the unreasonable restrictions and cost burdens of the Labor Party’s policy".
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Original: No stranger to filmmaking, Matt has produced a couple of short films, written a book on digital filmmaking and set up the digital film festival onedotzero, now in its tenth year.
Revised: No stranger to filmmaking, Matt has produced numerous digital short films, written a book on digital filmmaking and set up the digital film festival onedotzero, now in its tenth year.
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Original: No stranger to filmmaking, Matt has produced a couple of short films, written a book on digital filmmaking and set up the digital film festival onedotzero, now in its tenth year.
Revised: No stranger to filmmaking, Matt has produced a couple of short films, a series of books on digital filmmaking and set up the digital film festival onedotzero, now in its tenth year.
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Original: Matt Hanson aims to raise £1 million to fund the production of a feature-length film which would be distributed freely via the Internet under a Creative Commons licence, all funded through 50,000 people each donating £25 to the project, which he's called 'A Swarm of Angels'.
Revised: Matt Hanson aims to raise £1 million to fund the production of a feature-length film which would be distributed freely via the Internet under a licence, all funded through 50,000 people each donating £25 to the project, which he's called 'A Swarm of Angels'.
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Original:  No stranger to filmmaking, Matt has produced numerous digital short films, a series of books on digital filmmaking and set up the digital film festival onedotzero , now in its tenth year.
Revised:  No stranger to filmmaking, Matt has produced numerous digital short films, a series of books on digital filmmaking and set up the digital film festival , now in its tenth year.
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Original:  Those members not directly involved in making the film can still participate in the process by discussing ideas on a messageboard , and having a vote on certain crucial decisions like on which script gets chosen for production.
Revised:  Those members not directly involved in making the film can still participate in the process by discussing ideas on a , and having a vote on certain crucial decisions like on which script gets chosen for production.
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Original:  "Remember filmmaking is always a team effort - whether you are Martin Scorsese, Stanley Kubrick or Jean Luc Godard ,  you promote people within the project that will complement and bring something extra to the vision of the film.
Revised:  "Remember filmmaking is always a team effort - whether you are , you promote people within the project that will complement and bring something extra to the vision of the film.
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Original:  Members are promised a collector's edition DVD of the end product and exclusive merchandise, but the main distribution of the film will be via the Internet, using 'BitTorrents' and peer-to-peer networks.
Revised:  Members are promised a collector's edition of the end product and exclusive merchandise, but the main distribution of the film will be via the Internet, using 'BitTorrents' and peer-to-peer networks.
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Original:  Matt suggests that the 'younger generation' is more used to being involved with and interacting with entertainment, and points to remixes of the Star Wars films (eg 'The Phantom Edit' ) as an example of these 'mashups'.
Revised:  Matt suggests that the 'younger generation' is more used to being involved with and interacting with entertainment, and points to remixes of the films (eg 'The Phantom Edit' ) as an example of these 'mashups'.
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Original:  Matt suggests that the 'younger generation' is more used to being involved with and interacting with entertainment, and points to remixes of the Star Wars films (eg 'The Phantom Edit' ) as an example of these 'mashups'.
Revised:  Matt suggests that the 'younger generation' is more used to being involved with and interacting with entertainment, and points to remixes of the Star Wars films (eg '' ) as an example of these 'mashups'.
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Original:  "Remember filmmaking is always a team effort - whether you are  , or , you promote people within the project that will complement and bring something extra to the vision of the film.
Revised:  "Remember filmmaking is always a team effort - whether you are , you promote people within the project that will complement and bring something extra to the vision of the film.
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Original:  "Rather than the 'many producer' model, this is more of an  'smart consumer' model ... members can help implement and bring their expertise into play, and so become more actively involved in the production."
Revised:  "Rather than the 'many producer' model, this is more of an sic 'smart consumer' model ... members can help implement and bring their expertise into play, and so become more actively involved in the production."
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Original:  "Unlike many other filmmakers, I'm not wedded to cinema projection as the 'be all and end all' - I'm much more excited about people viewing remixed versions on their video ipods ," explains Matt.
Revised:  "Unlike many other filmmakers, I'm not wedded to cinema projection as the 'be all and end all' - I'm much more excited about people viewing remixed versions on their video iPods ," explains Matt.
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Original:  Contributors to the project include artists 'The Kleptones' , who will help with the soundtrack, comic book writer Warren Ellis and documentary filmmaker Grant Gee.
Revised:  Contributors to the project include artists The Kleptones , who will help with the soundtrack, comic book writer Warren Ellis and documentary filmmaker Grant Gee.
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Original: Authorities were on high alert as an KLM Cityhopper flight from London made an emergency landing on Eindhoven Airport .
Revised: Authorities were on high alert as a KLM Cityhopper flight from London made an emergency landing on Eindhoven Airport .
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Original: Authorities were on high alert as an KLM Cityhopper flight from London made an emergency landing on Eindhoven Airport .
Revised: Authorities were on high alert as an KLM Cityhopper flight from made an emergency landing on Eindhoven Airport .
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Original: Authorities were on high alert as an KLM Cityhopper flight from London made an emergency landing on Eindhoven Airport .
Revised: Authorities were on high alert as an KLM Cityhopper flight from London made an emergency landing at .
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Original:  The plane was forced to land with broken landing gear . During the landing, two tires broke and the plane was heavily shaking.
Revised:  The plane was forced to land with broken . During the landing, two tires broke and the plane was heavily shaking.
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Original:  Fifty-four people were on board the plane, 50 passengers and 4 crew members . During the emergency, the airport was immediatly closed and emergency crews were in minutes at the scene.
Revised:  Fifty-four people were on board at the time . During the emergency, the airport was immediatly closed and emergency crews were in minutes at the scene.
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Original:  Fifty-four people were on board the plane, 50 passengers and 4 crew members . During the emergency, the airport was immediatly closed and emergency crews were in minutes at the scene.
Revised:  Fifty-four people were on board the plane, 50 passengers and 4 crew members . During the emergency, the airport was immediatly closed and emergency crews arrived within minutes at the scene.
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Original:  Twenty fire units were send to the plane.
Revised:  Twenty fire units were sent to the plane.
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Original: Authorities were on high alert as a KLM Cityhopper flight from made an emergency landing at .
Revised: Authorities were on high alert as a Cityhopper flight from made an emergency landing at .
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Original: thumb Authorities were on high alert as a Cityhopper flight from made an emergency landing at .
Revised:  Authorities were on high alert as a Cityhopper flight from made an emergency landing at .
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Original:  The plane was forced to land with broken . During the landing, two tires broke and the plane was violently shaking .
Revised:  The plane was forced to land with broken . During the landing, two tires broke and the plane was violently shaken .
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Original:  During the emergency, the airport was immediatly closed and emergency crews arrived within minutes at the scene.
Revised:  During the emergency, the airport was immediately closed and emergency crews arrived within minutes at the scene.
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Original: Dr. Douglas Kerr, a neurologist at Johns Hopkins University, has recently led a research team to identify enough of the chemeicals necissary to regrow motor neurons.
Revised: Dr. Douglas Kerr, a neurologist at Johns Hopkins University, has recently led a research team to identify enough of the chemicals necessary to regrow motor neurons.
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Original:  They have succeeded in partially restorting paralyzed rats ability to walk.
Revised:  They have succeeded in partially restoring paralyzed rats ability to walk.
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Original:  The bars affected are the Dairy Milk Turkish 250g, Dairy Milk Caramel, Dairy Milk Mint bars, Dairy Milk 8 chunk, Dairy Milk 1kg bar, Dairy Milk Buttons Easter Egg 105g and 10p Freddo bar . Uneaten products can be returned to ' Cadbury Recall, Freepost MID20061, Birmingham B3O 2QZ', and then a full refund will be given.
Revised:  The bars affected are the Dairy Milk Turkish 250g, Dairy Milk Caramel, Dairy Milk Mint bars, Dairy Milk 8 chunk, Dairy Milk 1kg bar, Dairy Milk Buttons Easter Egg 105g and 10p Freddo bar . Uneaten products can be returned to ' COCK Recall, Freepost MID20061, Birmingham B3O 2QZ', and then a full refund will be given.
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Original:  The bars affected are the Dairy Milk Turkish 250g, Dairy Milk Caramel, Dairy Milk Mint bars, Dairy Milk 8 chunk, Dairy Milk 1kg bar, Dairy Milk Buttons Easter Egg 105g and 10p Freddo bar . Uneaten products can be returned to ' Cadbury Recall, Freepost MID20061, Birmingham B3O 2QZ', and then a full refund will be given.
Revised:  The bars affected are the Dairy Milk Turkish 250g, Dairy Milk Caramel, Dairy Milk Mint bars, Dairy Milk 8 chunk, Dairy Milk 1kg bar, Dairy Milk Buttons Easter Egg 105g and 10p Freddo bar . Uneaten products can be returned to ' Cadbury Recall, Freepost MID20061, GA B3O 2QZ', and then a full refund will be given.
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Original:  The decision was made in consultation with the Food Standards Agency
Revised:  The decision was made in consultation with the COCK Standards Agency
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Original: The British confectionist Cadbury's has recalled over one million chocolate bars from retailers in the UK over fears that they may be affected by salmonella.
Revised: The British confectioner Cadbury's has recalled over one million chocolate bars from retailers in the UK over fears that they may be affected by salmonella.
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Original:  Luis Aragones will enter the round of sixteen game against the side in the runner-up position in Group G with a first team of well rested-players.
Revised:  Luis Aragones would enter the round of sixteen game against the side in the runner-up position in Group G with a first team of well rested-players.
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Original:  Luis Aragones would enter the round of sixteen game against the side in the runner-up position in Group G with a first team of well rested-players.
Revised:  Luis Aragones would enter the round of sixteen game against France, runners-up in Group G, with a first team of well rested-players.
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Original:  The offshore company HavenCo currently uses it to hold servers for the computer industry
Revised:  The offshore company HavenCo used it to hold servers for the computer industry
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Original:  The Harwich off-shore lifeboat team rescued one person caught in the fire , who was transferred to Ipswich hospital  .
Revised:  The Harwich off-shore lifeboat team rescued one person caught in the fire was transferred to Ipswich hospital .
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Original:  The Harwich off-shore lifeboat team attended the platform, and one person caught in the fire was transferred to Ipswich hospital by an RAF helicopter .
Revised:  One person who was caught in the fire was transferred to Ipswich hospital by an RAF helicopter .
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Original:  Fire fighters from the Thames Coastguard poured water onto the structure, and rescued a security guard who has been taken to Ipswich hospital  .
Revised:  Fire fighters from the Thames Coastguard poured water onto the structure, and rescued a security guard who was taken to Ipswich hospital .
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Original:  The centre-back put so much neck power into the contact he headbutted Korea Republic defender Jin-Cheul Choi head on the follow-through.
Revised:  The centre-back put so much neck power into the contact he headbutted Korea Republic defender Jin-Cheul Choi on the follow-through.
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Original: 50px Switzerland dashed the Fifa World Cup dreams of the Korea Republic beating them 2-0 to top Group G, Friday.
Revised: 50px Switzerland dashed the Fifa World Cup dreams of the Republic of Korea beating them 2-0 to top Group G, Friday.
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Original:  The result meant Korea Republic who had four points would finish third in Group G behind France on five points, after the French beat Togo, Friday.
Revised:  The result meant Republic of Korea who had four points would finish third in Group G behind France on five points, after the French beat Togo, Friday.
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Revised:  Republic of Korea 100px|right
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Original: The cause of death was complications from a stroke suffered last Sunday said his publicist, Keven Sasaki .
Revised: The cause of death was complications from a stroke suffered last Sunday said his publicist, Keven Sasaki 
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Original:  The cause of death was complications from a stroke suffered last Sunday said his publicist, Keven Sasaki
Revised:  Spelling is best known as the producer of several popular television series, including Starsky and Hutch, Charlie's Angels, Dynasty, Beverly Hills 90210, Melrose Place and Charmed
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Original: The death penalty was originally abolished in 1987, but it was reintroduced in 1993.
Revised: In the Philippines, the death penalty was originally abolished in 1987, but it was reintroduced in 1993.
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Original:  As of 2005, a majority of states (122) were abolitionist, and a minority (73) retained the death penalty .
Revised:  As of 2005, a majority of states (122) were abolitionist, and a minority (73) retained the death penalty 
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