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Original:  Prime Minister Blair will pledge to double the UK's development aid for Pakistan to £480m ( $960m).
Revised:  Prime Minister Blair is expected to pledge to double the UK's development aid for Pakistan to £480m ( $960m).
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Original:  Also this weekend, Chancellor Brown promised an extra £100m ($188m) to Iraq to “ help rebuild the economy ” . Tony Blair expects to meet the President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf and Pakistan ’ s Prime Minister Shaukat Aziz to discuss anti-terrorism measures and the radicalisation of youth.
Revised:  Also this weekend, Chancellor Brown promised an extra £100m ($188m) to Iraq to " help rebuild the economy ” . Tony Blair expects to meet the President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf and Pakistan ’ s Prime Minister Shaukat Aziz to discuss anti-terrorism measures and the radicalisation of youth.
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Original:  Also this weekend, Chancellor Brown promised an extra £100m ($188m) to Iraq to “ help rebuild the economy ” . Tony Blair expects to meet the President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf and Pakistan ’ s Prime Minister Shaukat Aziz to discuss anti-terrorism measures and the radicalisation of youth.
Revised:  Also this weekend, Chancellor Brown promised an extra £100m ($188m) to Iraq to “ help rebuild the economy " . Tony Blair expects to meet the President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf and Pakistan ’ s Prime Minister Shaukat Aziz to discuss anti-terrorism measures and the radicalisation of youth.
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Original:  Also this weekend, Chancellor Brown promised an extra £100m ($188m) to Iraq to “ help rebuild the economy ” . Tony Blair expects to meet the President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf and Pakistan ’ s Prime Minister Shaukat Aziz to discuss anti-terrorism measures and the radicalisation of youth.
Revised:  Also this weekend, Chancellor Brown promised an extra £100m ($188m) to Iraq to “ help rebuild the economy ” . Tony Blair expects to meet the President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf and Pakistan ' s Prime Minister Shaukat Aziz to discuss anti-terrorism measures and the radicalisation of youth.
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Original: New Zealand's NCEA (National Certificate of Educational Achievement) external end of year exams started today with 136,000 students taking part.
Revised: New Zealand's NCEA (National Certificate of Educational Achievement) external end of year exams started today with 
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Original:  The exams will finish on December 9. "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority)  
Revised:  "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority) 
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Original:  The exams will finish on December 9. "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority)  
Revised:  The exams will finish on December 9. "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority) . 
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Original:  The exams will finish on December 9. "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority)  
Revised:  The exams will finish on December 9. "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority) The exams will finish on December 9
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Original: New Zealand's NCEA (National Certificate of Educational Achievement) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority)  .
Revised: New Zealand's NCEA (National Certificate of Educational Achievement) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority) said .
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Original:  The exams will finish on December 9   
Revised:  The exams will finish on December 9. 
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Original: " With 136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres, there will always be some anomalies and unforeseen events, such as the traffic jams and floods of 2005," he said.
Revised: " ... there will always be some anomalies and unforeseen events, such as the traffic jams and floods of 2005," he said.
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Original: New Zealand's NCEA ( National Certificate of Educational Achievement  ) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people  sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA ( New Zealand Qualifications Authority  ) said.
Revised: New Zealand's National Certificate of Educational Achievement ) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA ( New Zealand Qualifications Authority ) said.
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Original: New Zealand's NCEA ( National Certificate of Educational Achievement  ) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people  sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA ( New Zealand Qualifications Authority  ) said.
Revised: New Zealand's NCEA ( National Certificate of Educational Achievement ) external end of year exams started today . It is expected that "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA ( New Zealand Qualifications Authority ) said.
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Original: New Zealand's NCEA ( National Certificate of Educational Achievement  ) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people  sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA ( New Zealand Qualifications Authority  ) said.
Revised: New Zealand's NCEA ( National Certificate of Educational Achievement ) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people will be sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA ( New Zealand Qualifications Authority ) said.
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Original: New Zealand's NCEA ( National Certificate of Educational Achievement  ) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people  sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA ( New Zealand Qualifications Authority  ) said.
Revised: New Zealand's NCEA ( National Certificate of Educational Achievement ) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of New Zealand Qualifications Authority ) said.
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Original: New Zealand's NCEA ( National Certificate of Educational Achievement  ) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people  sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA ( New Zealand Qualifications Authority  ) said.
Revised: New Zealand's NCEA ( National Certificate of Educational Achievement ) external end of year exams started today with "...136,000 people sitting exams at 405 exam centres..." Bali Haque, deputy chief executive of NZQA ( New Zealand Qualifications Authority (NZQA ) said.
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Original:  These exams are also being closely scrutinised becauase of the past problems with NCEA.
Revised:  These exams are also being closely scrutinised because of the past problems with NCEA.
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Original:  Over 4,500 supervisors will, of course, supervise the 555 exams  
Revised:  Over 4,500 supervisors will, of course, supervise the 555 exams . 
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Original:  "We are confident that we are prepared for such eventualities , " Mr Haque said.
Revised:  "We are confident that we are prepared for such eventualities . " Mr Haque said.
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Original: The fires which have been burning in the w:Mount Victoria , New South Wales |Mount Victoria and Blackheath since last Sunday have burnt around 2500 hectares of bushland.
Revised: The fires which have been burning in the |Mount Victoria and Blackheath since last Sunday have burnt around 2500 hectares of bushland.
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Original: The fires which have been burning in the w:Mount Victoria , New South Wales |Mount Victoria and Blackheath since last Sunday have burnt around 2500 hectares of bushland.
Revised: The fires which have been burning in the w:Mount Victoria , New South Wales Mount Victoria and Blackheath since last Sunday have burnt around 2500 hectares of bushland.
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Original:  In an attempt to contain the fires, fire personnel from the NSW Fire Brigade, Rural Fire Service and the National Parks and Willdlife Service have been undertaking backburning operations over the weekend.
Revised:  In an attempt to contain the fires, fire personnel from the NSW Fire Brigade, Rural Fire Service and the National Parks and Wildlife Service have been undertaking backburning operations over the weekend.
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Original:  Mahmoud Abbas, the Palestinian president has called for a ceasefire by those launching rockets and suicide attacks against Israel and the Palestinian group Islamic Jihad is said to be considering this request carefully   
Revised:  Mahmoud Abbas, the Palestinian president has called for a ceasefire by those launching rockets and suicide attacks against Israel and the Palestinian group Islamic Jihad is said to be considering this request carefully . 
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Original:  An Israeli spokesman claimed that they differentiate between innocent people and terrorists and that they would continue to attack terrorists.
Revised:  An Israeli spokesman said that Israeli forces differentiate between innocent people and terrorists and that they would continue to attack terrorists.
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Original: Led by Nizar Rayan, a senior Hamas militant , hundreds of Palestinian refugees gathered to protect the house of the leader of a militant group in Jabaliya refugee camp in Gaza and succeeded in thwarting an Israeli attack.
Revised: Led by Nizar Rayan, a senior Hamas fighter , hundreds of Palestinian refugees gathered to protect the house of the leader of a militant group in Jabaliya refugee camp in Gaza and succeeded in thwarting an Israeli attack.
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Original:  As part of their campaign against militants , Israeli forces had warned Mohammedweil Baroud, a commander in the Popular Resistance Committee, that his house would be attacked in 30 minutes time.
Revised:  As part of their campaign against Palestinian fighters , Israeli forces had warned Mohammedweil Baroud, a commander in the Popular Resistance Committee, that his house would be attacked in 30 minutes time.
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Original:  On November 8, an Israeli shell killed 19 civilians in Beit Hanoun, due to, what the Israelis called, a “ technical fault in targeting ” . An Israeli spokesman said that Israeli forces differentiate between innocent people and terrorists and that they would continue to attack terrorists .
Revised:  On November 8, an Israeli shell killed 19 civilians in Beit Hanoun, due to, what the Israelis called, a " technical fault in targeting ” . An Israeli spokesman said that Israeli forces differentiate between innocent people and terrorists and that they would continue to attack terrorists .
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Original:  On November 8, an Israeli shell killed 19 civilians in Beit Hanoun, due to, what the Israelis called, a “ technical fault in targeting ” . An Israeli spokesman said that Israeli forces differentiate between innocent people and terrorists and that they would continue to attack terrorists .
Revised:  On November 8, an Israeli shell killed 19 civilians in Beit Hanoun, due to, what the Israelis called, a “ technical fault in targeting " . An Israeli spokesman said that Israeli forces differentiate between innocent people and terrorists and that they would continue to attack terrorists .
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Original:  On November 8, an Israeli shell killed 19 civilians in Beit Hanoun, due to, what the Israelis called, a “ technical fault in targeting ” . An Israeli spokesman said that Israeli forces differentiate between innocent people and terrorists and that they would continue to attack terrorists .
Revised:  On November 8, an Israeli shell killed 19 civilians in Beit Hanoun, due to, what the Israelis called, a “ technical fault in targeting ” . An Israeli spokesman said that Israeli forces differentiate between innocent people and "terrorists" and that they would continue to attack terrorists .
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Original:  On November 8, an Israeli shell killed 19 civilians in Beit Hanoun, due to, what the Israelis called, a “ technical fault in targeting ” . An Israeli spokesman said that Israeli forces differentiate between innocent people and terrorists and that they would continue to attack terrorists .
Revised:  On November 8, an Israeli shell killed 19 civilians in Beit Hanoun, due to, what the Israelis called, a “ technical fault in targeting ” . An Israeli spokesman said that Israeli forces differentiate between innocent people and terrorists and that they would continue the attacks .
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Original:  Instead, he called for help from the local mosque and people swarmed round and over Mr Baroud ’ s house in such numbers as to dissuade the Israelis from making the promised attack.
Revised:  Instead, he called for help from the local mosque and people swarmed round and over Mr Baroud ' s house in such numbers as to dissuade the Israelis from making the promised attack.
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Original:  The encounter took place at the ongoing APEC summit in Hanoi   
Revised:  The encounter took place at the ongoing Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) summit in Hanoi 
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Original:  The encounter took place at the ongoing APEC summit in Hanoi   
Revised:  The encounter took place at the ongoing APEC summit in Hanoi . 
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Original: According to reports from Agence France-Press (AFP), and Thailand's The Nation, US president George Bush has met with the recently appointed Prime Minister, Surayud Chulanont.
Revised: According to reports from Agence France-Press (AFP), and Thai newspaper, The Nation, US president George Bush has met with the recently appointed Prime Minister, Surayud Chulanont.
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Original:  Discussion was said to include currently in-place sanctions against Russian arms and military aircraft manufacturers  
Revised:  Discussion was said to include currently in-place sanctions against Russian arms and military aircraft manufacturers . 
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Original:  He worked at the Brazilian university Unicamp and  was the founder of its Department of Cosmic Rays and Chronology of the "Gleb Wataghin" Physics Institute.
Revised:  He worked at the Brazilian university Unicamp and he was the founder of its Department of Cosmic Rays and Chronology of the "Gleb Wataghin" Physics Institute.
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Original:  He worked at the Brazilian university Unicamp and he was the founder of its Department of Cosmic Rays and Chronology of the "Gleb Wataghin" Physics Institute . Lattes, along with Giuseppe Occhialini and Cecil Powell was responsible by the discovery of the subatomic particle called pion, in 1947.
Revised:  He worked at the Brazilian university Unicamp and he was the founder of its Department of Cosmic Rays and Chronology of the "Gleb Wataghin" Physics Institute Lattes, along with Giuseppe Occhialini and Cecil Powell was responsible by the discovery of the subatomic particle called pion, in 1947.
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Original: The physicist was born in July 11, 1924 in Curitiba, Paraná.
Revised: The physicist was born on July 11, 1924 in Curitiba, Paraná.
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Original:  His dead was caused by a cardio-respiratory faillure and it ocurred at the Hospital of the Universidade Estadual de Campinas (Unicamp), in  Barão Geraldo district, at the city of Campinas, São Paulo state, Brazil.
Revised:  His death was caused by a cardio-respiratory faillure and it ocurred at the Hospital of the Universidade Estadual de Campinas (Unicamp), in Barão Geraldo district, at the city of Campinas, São Paulo state, Brazil.
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Original:  His dead was caused by a cardio-respiratory faillure and it ocurred at the Hospital of the Universidade Estadual de Campinas (Unicamp), in  Barão Geraldo district, at the city of Campinas, São Paulo state, Brazil.
Revised:  His dead was caused by a cardio-respiratory failure and occurred at the Hospital of the Universidade Estadual de Campinas (Unicamp), in Barão Geraldo district, at the city of Campinas, São Paulo state, Brazil.
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Original:  His dead was caused by a cardio-respiratory faillure and it ocurred at the Hospital of the Universidade Estadual de Campinas (Unicamp), in  Barão Geraldo district, at the city of Campinas, São Paulo state, Brazil.
Revised:  His dead was caused by a cardio-respiratory faillure and it ocurred at the Hospital of the Universidade Estadual de Campinas (Unicamp), in the Barão Geraldo district, at the city of Campinas, São Paulo state, Brazil.
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Original:  His dead was caused by a cardio-respiratory faillure and it ocurred at the Hospital of the Universidade Estadual de Campinas (Unicamp), in  Barão Geraldo district, at the city of Campinas, São Paulo state, Brazil.
Revised:  His dead was caused by a cardio-respiratory faillure and it ocurred at the Hospital of the Universidade Estadual de Campinas (Unicamp), in Barão Geraldo district, in the city of Campinas, São Paulo state, Brazil.
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Original:  Lattes, along with Giuseppe Occhialini and Cecil Powell was responsible by the discovery of the subatomic particle called  pion, in 1947.
Revised:  Lattes, along with Giuseppe Occhialini and Cecil Powell was responsible for the discovery of the subatomic particle called pion, in 1947.
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Original:  Lattes, along with Giuseppe Occhialini and Cecil Powell was responsible by the discovery of the subatomic particle called  pion, in 1947.
Revised:  Lattes, along with Giuseppe Occhialini and Cecil Powell was responsible by the discovery of the subatomic particle called the pion, in 1947.
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Original:  This discovery was very important to the understanding of the sub-atomic structure of the atom.
Revised:  This discovery was very important for the understanding of the sub-atomic structure of the atom.
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Original:  The last 30 years he was living at Campinas, in Barão Geraldo.
Revised:  For the last 30 years he was living at Campinas, in Barão Geraldo.
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Original:  The last 30 years he was living at Campinas, in Barão Geraldo.
Revised:  The last 30 years he lived at Campinas, in Barão Geraldo.
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Original:  Head of the Cyprus Turkish Football Federation (Kıbrıs Türk Futbol Federasyonu, KTFF) Niyazi Okutan called for Turkish Cypriots to come and hel
Revised:  Head of Cyprus Turkish Football Federation (Kıbrıs Türk Futbol Federasyonu, KTFF) Niyazi Okutan called for Turkish Cypriots to come and hel
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Original:  A recent population count in the Congo turned up only 10 rhinos left in the wild, which led conservationists in January 2005 to propose airlifting White Rhinos from Garamba into Kenya, where their numbers decreased to less then 200*.
Revised:  A recent population count in the Congo turned up only 10 rhinos left in the wild, which led conservationists in January 2005 to propose airlifting White Rhinos from Garamba into Kenya, where their numbers decreased to less than 200*.
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Original: The Conservative shadow home secretary, David Davis, welcomed Lord Goldsmith’s statement about the 90 day period and said that this justified the stance taken by opponents of the Bill proposing the extension that had resulted in its defeat during the last session of Parliament.
Revised: The Conservative shadow home secretary, David Davis, welcomed Lord Goldsmith’s statement about the 90 day period and said that this justified the stance taken by opponents of the Bill 
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Original:  The Conservative shadow home secretary, David Davis, welcomed Lord Goldsmith’s statement about the 90 day period and said that this justified the stance taken by opponents of the Bill that had resulted in the rejection of the 90 day proposal and the acceptance of 28 days as the maximum period of detention without charge.
Revised:  that had resulted in the rejection of the 90 day proposal and the acceptance of 28 days as the maximum period of detention without charge.
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Original:  He believed that the evidence supported the longer peroid .
Revised:  He believed that the evidence supported the longer period .
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Original:  He believed that the evidence supported the longer period .
Revised:  Blair stated that he believed that the evidence supported the longer period .
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Original: Otaki, a small town located in the North Island of New Zealand, has been subject to vandals who has smashed around 70 windows in the local primary school, Otaki Primary School.
Revised: Otaki, a small town located in the North Island of New Zealand, has been subject to vandals who have smashed around 70 windows in the local primary school, Otaki Primary School.
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Original:  The smashed windows resulted in the closure of the primary school today , it is expected that it will be open tomorrow.
Revised:  The smashed windows resulted in the closure of the primary school today . It is expected that it will be open tomorrow.
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Original:  The smashed windows resulted in the closure of the primary school today , it is expected that it will be open tomorrow.
Revised:  The smashed windows resulted in the closure of the primary school today , it is expected that the school will be open tomorrow.
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Original:  The police are reporting that the library, memorial hall, law offices, tyre factor, butchery and the citizen's advice bureau were all attacked, possibly among more others .
Revised:  The police are reporting that the library, memorial hall, law offices, tyre factor, butchery and the citizen's advice bureau were all attacked, with other attacks possible .
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Original:  Business owners are still reporting damage to their properties however . Sergeant Mark Toms said: "The damage seems to be widespread, and has not been confined to the school.
Revised:  Business owners are still reporting property damage . Sergeant Mark Toms said: "The damage seems to be widespread, and has not been confined to the school.
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Original: The subscription internet browser provided by Microsoft left many users of the internet browser MSN Explorer frozen out beginning on Friday of last week.
Revised: The subscription internet browser provided by Microsoft left many users of MSN Explorer frozen out beginning on Friday of last week.
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Original:  The existing MSN Explorer software will need to be removed, some Windows registry folders may need to be removed, and the program completely re-downloaded and re-installed.
Revised:  The existing MSN Explorer software will need to be removed, some Windows registry folders may need to be removed, and the software completely re-downloaded and re-installed.
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Original: The Internet Explorer browser software bundled with the Windows operating system remains operable, along with  non-MSN software like 'MySpaces' . Subscribers to MSN are still able to retrieve e-mail by accessing their Hotmail.
Revised: The Internet Explorer browser software bundled with the Windows operating system remains operable, along with other non-MSN software like 'MySpaces' . Subscribers to MSN are still able to retrieve e-mail by accessing their Hotmail.
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