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Original:  During Azhar's time as chair the KPK has eposed bribery at the former and prosecuted an in-law relative of the president as the country prepared for elections, with a jail sentence resulting    
Revised:  During Azhar's time as chair the KPK has eposed bribery at the former and prosecuted an in-law relative of the president as the country prepared for elections, with a jail sentence resulting . 
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Original:  Police commissioner Wiliardi Wizard was accused of locating the assassins used;
Revised:  Police commissioner Wiliardi Wizar was accused of locating the assassins used;
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Original:  he claimed his senior had ordered him to testify he had been told by Azhar to kill Zulkarnaen     
Revised:  he claimed his senior had ordered him to testify he had been told by Azhar to kill Zulkarnaen . 
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Original:  The proesecution of Antasari Azhar and three others has been controversial, with some fearing the so-called " judicial mafia " played a role.
Revised:  The prosecution of Antasari Azhar and three others has been controversial, with some fearing the so-called " judicial mafia " played a role.
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Original:  The proesecution of Antasari Azhar and three others has been controversial, with some fearing the so-called " judicial mafia " played a role.
Revised:  The proesecution of Antasari Azhar and three others has been controversial, with some fearing the so-called " Judicial Mafia " played a role.
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Original:  The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) has already seen a proven plot to discredit it and frame its senior members.
Revised:  The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) already saw a proven plot to discredit it and frame its senior members.
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Original:  The trial instead unveiled a plot to convict the men of offences they had not commited . Protests in the street ensued, and locals gave corrupt officials the joint nickname of the "Judicial Mafia".
Revised:  The trial , instead, unveiled a plot to convict the men of offences they had not commited . Protests in the street ensued, and locals gave corrupt officials the joint nickname of the "Judicial Mafia".
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Original:  The trial instead unveiled a plot to convict the men of offences they had not commited . Protests in the street ensued, and locals gave corrupt officials the joint nickname of the "Judicial Mafia".
Revised:  The trial instead unveiled a plot to convict the men of offences they had not committed . Protests in the street ensued, and locals gave corrupt officials the joint nickname of the "Judicial Mafia".
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Original:  The scandal caused a chief detective and a deputy attorney general to resign ;
Revised:  The scandal resulted in the resignations of a chief detective and a deputy attorney general to resign ;
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Original:  The scandal caused a chief detective and a deputy attorney general to resign ;
Revised:  The scandal caused a chief detective and a deputy attorney general ;
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Original:  the KPK had begun probing the attorney general's office and  national police.
Revised:  the KPK had begun probing the attorney general's office and that of the national police.
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Original:  During Azhar's time as chair the KPK has eposed bribery at the former and prosecuted an in-law relative of the president as the countryprepared for elections , with a jail sentence resulting .
Revised:  During Azhar's time as chair the KPK has exposed bribery at the former and prosecuted an in-law relative of the president as the countryprepared for elections , with a jail sentence resulting .
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Original:  During Azhar's time as chair the KPK has eposed bribery at the former and prosecuted an in-law relative of the president as the countryprepared for elections , with a jail sentence resulting .
Revised:  During Azhar's time as chair the KPK has eposed bribery at the former and prosecuted an in-law relative of the president during the country's election preparations , with a jail sentence resulting .
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Original:  During Azhar's time as chair the KPK has eposed bribery at the former and prosecuted an in-law relative of the president as the countryprepared for elections , with a jail sentence resulting .
Revised:  During Azhar's time as chair the KPK has eposed bribery at the former and prosecuted an in-law relative of the president as the countryprepared for elections , with a jail sentence being the result .
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Original:  The defendants had claimed political elements had orchestrated a conspiracy to see the quartet convicted.
Revised:  The defendants had claimed political elements orchestrated a conspiracy to see the quartet convicted.
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Original:  The judges disagreed, with judge Herri Swantoro telling the court  "Defendant Antasari Azhar has been legitimately proven guilty of participating in persuading the carrying out of a premeditated murder."
Revised:  The judges disagreed, with judge Herri Swantoro telling the court , "Defendant Antasari Azhar has been legitimately proven guilty of participating in persuading the carrying out of a premeditated murder."
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Original:  The  judgement ran to 179 pages.
Revised:  The court's judgement ran to 179 pages.
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Original:  Media mogul Sigid Haryo Wibisono was accused of financing the contract killing, and businessman Jerry Hermawan Lo of arranging a meeting with the gunmen.
Revised:  Media mogul Sigid Haryo Wibisono stood accused of financing the contract killing, and businessman Jerry Hermawan Lo of arranging a meeting with the gunmen.
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Original:  All are intending appeals . Despite the conviction of his relative, Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono retained the presidency last June by a landslide majority.
Revised:  All intend to appeal the verdicts . Despite the conviction of his relative, Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono retained the presidency last June by a landslide majority.
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Original:  Originally elected in 2004, Yudhoyono has used an anti-corruption stance in his campaigns, heaping praise upon the KPK . Azhar was head  from December 2007 until his arrest.
Revised:  Originally elected in 2004, Yudhoyono has used an anti-corruption stance in his campaigns, heaping praise upon the KPK which Azhar was head from December 2007 until his arrest.
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Original:  Originally elected in 2004, Yudhoyono has used an anti-corruption stance in his campaigns, heaping praise upon the KPK . Azhar was head  from December 2007 until his arrest.
Revised:  Originally elected in 2004, Yudhoyono has used an anti-corruption stance in his campaigns, heaping praise upon the KPK . Azhar was head of from December 2007 until his arrest.
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Original:  Alleged to have comprised the gang behind the shooting, they received sentences varying from seventten to eighteen years imprisonment
Revised:  Alleged to have comprised the gang behind the shooting, they received sentences varying from seventeen to eighteen years imprisonment
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Original: The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK)  already saw a proven plot to discredit it and frame its senior members.
Revised: The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) said it already saw a proven plot to discredit it and frame its senior members.
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Original: The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK)  already saw a proven plot to discredit it and frame its senior members.
Revised: The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) already saw a proven plot to discredit the commission and frame its senior members.
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Original: The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) said it already saw a proven plot to discredit the commission and frame its senior members.
Revised: The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) already saw a proven plot to discredit the commission and frame its senior members.
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Original: The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) said it already saw a proven plot to discredit the commission and frame its senior members.
Revised: The Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) said it already saw a proven plot to discredit it and frame its senior members.
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Original: Super Typhoon Haitang will make landfall in Taiwan in 48 hours.
Revised: Super Typhoon Haitang Super Typhoon Haitang is expected to make landfall in Taiwan in 48 hours.
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Original: Super Typhoon Haitang will make landfall in Taiwan in 48 hours.
Revised: Super Typhoon Haitang will make landfall in Taiwan within 48 hours.
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Original:  Haitang is  a Category 5 typhoon, with winds at 160 mph , and gusts up to 195 mph, and is currently moving West-North West at 14 knots.
Revised:  Haitang is currently a Category 5 typhoon, with winds at 160 mph , and gusts up to 195 mph, and is currently moving West-North West at 14 knots.
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Original:  Haitang is  a Category 5 typhoon, with winds at 160 mph , and gusts up to 195 mph, and is currently moving West-North West at 14 knots.
Revised:  Haitang is a Category 5 typhoon, with winds at 160 mph and gusts up to 195 mph, and is currently moving West-North West at 14 knots.
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Original:  Haitang is  a Category 5 typhoon, with winds at 160 mph , and gusts up to 195 mph, and is currently moving West-North West at 14 knots.
Revised:  Haitang is a Category 5 typhoon, with winds at 160 mph , and gusts up to 195 mph, and is currently moving west-northwest at 14 knots.
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Original:  As of 12:00 GMT on July 16, Haitang was located at 20.7° N, 127.7° E  
Revised:  As of 12:00 GMT on July 16, Haitang was located at 20.7° N, 127.7° E . 
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Original:  In 48 hours Max sustained winds will be down 090 kt, gusts 110 kt.
Revised:  In 48 hours Max sustained winds are predicted to be down to 090 kt, gusts 110 kt.
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Original:  In 48 hours Max sustained winds are predicted to be down to 090 kt, gusts 110 kt .
Revised:  In 48 hours , max sustained winds are predicted to be down to 090 kt, gusts 110 kt .
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Original: Super Typhoon Haitang Super Typhoon Haitang is expected to make landfall in Taiwan within 24 hours .
Revised: Super Typhoon Haitang Super Typhoon Haitang is now making landfall in Taiwan within 24 hours .
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Original: Super Typhoon Haitang Super Typhoon Haitang is expected to make landfall in Taiwan within 24 hours .
Revised: Super Typhoon Haitang Super Typhoon Haitang is expected to make landfall in Taiwan .
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Original: British fashion designer Alexander McQueen found dead aged 40 British fashion designer Alexander McQueen has died at the age of 40.
Revised: British fashion designer Alexander McQueen has died at the age of 40.
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Original:   According to reports, McQueen committed suicide  , however this has not been confirmed   
Revised:  According to reports, McQueen committed suicide , however this has not been confirmed . 
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Original:  He was also given a CBE  in 2003.
Revised:  He was also given a CBE by Queen Elizabeth II in 2003.
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Original: The Metropolitian Police have said that they are are not treating his death as suspicious.
Revised: The Metropolitian Police said they are are not treating his death as suspicious.
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Original: The Metropolitian Police have said that they are are not treating his death as suspicious.
Revised: The Metropolitian Police have said that they are are not treating the death as suspicious.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the police force said : " We  were called by London Ambulance Service at about 10.20am this morning to reports of a man found dead at an address in Green Street, W1. He is believed to be 40 years old and from London.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the police force said , " We were called by London Ambulance Service at about 10.20am this morning to reports of a man found dead at an address in Green Street, W1. He is believed to be 40 years old and from London.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the police force said : " We  were called by London Ambulance Service at about 10.20am this morning to reports of a man found dead at an address in Green Street, W1. He is believed to be 40 years old and from London.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the police force said : " w were called by London Ambulance Service at about 10.20am this morning to reports of a man found dead at an address in Green Street, W1. He is believed to be 40 years old and from London.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the police force said : " We  were called by London Ambulance Service at about 10.20am this morning to reports of a man found dead at an address in Green Street, W1. He is believed to be 40 years old and from London.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the police force said : " We e were called by London Ambulance Service at about 10.20am this morning to reports of a man found dead at an address in Green Street, W1. He is believed to be 40 years old and from London.
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Original:  Police were called to his apartment at approximately 1020 GMT on Thursday.
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Original:  Between the years of 1996 - 2003, McQueen had been awarded Fashion Designer of the Year four times.
Revised:  Between the years of 1996 - 2003, McQueen received Fashion Designer of the Year four times.
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Original:  The fashion designer had a new selection of clothing, entitled "McQ", that was expected to be shown on Thursday , however the show has now been cancelled.
Revised:  The fashion designer had a new selection of clothing, entitled "McQ", that was expected to be shown on Thursday ; the show has now been cancelled.
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Original:  On Thursday , a statement was released from McQueen's company headquarters which said : "On behalf of Lee McQueen's family, Alexander McQueen today announces the tragic news that Lee McQueen, the founder and designer of the Alexander McQueen brand, has been found dead at his home.
Revised:  Yesterday , a statement was released from McQueen's company headquarters which said : "On behalf of Lee McQueen's family, Alexander McQueen today announces the tragic news that Lee McQueen, the founder and designer of the Alexander McQueen brand, has been found dead at his home.
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Original:  On Thursday , a statement was released from McQueen's company headquarters which said : "On behalf of Lee McQueen's family, Alexander McQueen today announces the tragic news that Lee McQueen, the founder and designer of the Alexander McQueen brand, has been found dead at his home.
Revised:  On Thursday , a statement was released from McQueen's company headquarters stating : "On behalf of Lee McQueen's family, Alexander McQueen today announces the tragic news that Lee McQueen, the founder and designer of the Alexander McQueen brand, has been found dead at his home.
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Original: The Metropolitan Police said they are are not treating the death as suspicious.
Revised: The Metropolitan Police said they are not treating the death as suspicious.
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Original:  The businesses, which are believed to have an annual turnover of over €1bn, include 35 local distribution depots, 6 oil importation facilities, 55 retail service stations and the supply of fuel to 105 independent service stations throught Ireland.
Revised:  The businesses, which are believed to have an annual turnover of over €1bn, include 35 local distribution depots, 6 oil importation facilities, 55 retail service stations and the supply of fuel to 105 independent service stations throughout Ireland.
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Original:  Image:Phung.png Witnesses said a fuel tanker was slowly approaching the pumps at the station when the attacker ran towards it and detonated explosives strapped to his body.
Revised:  Witnesses said a fuel tanker was slowly approaching the pumps at the station when the attacker ran towards it and detonated explosives strapped to his body.
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Original:  Mussayib, a religiously mixed town, lies in an area named the "triangle of death", due to the large number of kidnappings and killings of Shiite Muslims traveling between Baghdad and the Shiite holy cities of Karbala andNajaf
Revised:  Mussayib, a religiously mixed town, lies in an area named the "triangle of death", due to the large number of kidnappings and killings of Shiite Muslims traveling between Baghdad and the Shiite holy cities of and
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Original: The violence started in the capital Mogadishu, when Islamist rebels started firing at the Villa Somalia, the presidential palac ;
Revised: The violence started in the capital Mogadishu, when Islamist rebels started firing at the Villa Somalia, the presidential palace ;
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Original:  "The death toll may rise because we have not yet reached some of the districts where shells also landed," said the coordinator of the Mogadishu ambulance service, Ali Muse, to the Reuters news agency  
Revised:  "The death toll may rise because we have not yet reached some of the districts where shells also landed," said the coordinator of the Mogadishu ambulance service, Ali Muse, to the Reuters news agency . 
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Original: The violence started  in the capital  Mogadishu, when Islamist rebels started firing at the Villa Somalia, the presidential palace;
Revised: The violence started in the capital , Mogadishu, when Islamist rebels started firing at the Villa Somalia, the presidential palace;
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Original: U.S. retail heavy hitters such as Walgreens, Kroger’s  and five other food and drug chains are suing the world’s largest credit card company, Visa International Inc.
Revised: U.S. retail chain stores Kroger’s and five other food and drug chains are suing the world’s largest credit card company, Visa International Inc.
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Original: U.S. retail heavy hitters such as Walgreens, Kroger’s  and five other food and drug chains are suing the world’s largest credit card company, Visa International Inc.
Revised: U.S. retail heavy hitters such as Walgreens, Kroger’s and five other food and drugstore chains have filed a lawsuit against the world’s largest credit card company, Visa International Inc.
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Original:  The lawsuit claims that Visa is in collusion with its member banks to fix transaction fees the company takes as a percentage of each retail sale.
Revised:  The retail merchants claim that Visa acts in collusion with its member banks to fix transaction fees the company takes as a percentage of each retail sale.
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Original:  The lawsuit claims that Visa is in collusion with its member banks to fix transaction fees the company takes as a percentage of each retail sale.
Revised:  The lawsuit claims that Visa is in collusion with its member banks to fix transaction fees taken as a percentage of each retail sale.
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Original:  The suit was filed in U.S. District Court in Manhattan  and seeks unspecified damages.
Revised:  The suit was filed in U.S. District Court in Manhattan , and seeks unspecified damages.
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Original:  Member banks, those banks that issue and process merchants’ Visa transactions, are unable to negotiate its transaction fee directly with the merchant, and merchants are forced to accept Visa purchases regardless of the issuing bank.
Revised:  Member banks, those banks that issue and process merchants’ Visa transactions, are unable to negotiate transaction fees directly with the merchant, and merchants are forced to accept Visa purchases regardless of the issuing bank.
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Original:  A small group of Connecticut retailers filed a similar lawsuit last month naming along with Visa,  MasterCard and several  large banks.
Revised:  A small group of Connecticut retailers filed a similar lawsuit last month naming with Visa, MasterCard and several large banks.
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Original:  A small group of Connecticut retailers filed a similar lawsuit last month naming along with Visa,  MasterCard and several  large banks.
Revised:  A small group of Connecticut retailers filed a similar lawsuit last month naming along with Visa, also MasterCard and several large banks.
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Original:  A small group of Connecticut retailers filed a similar lawsuit last month naming along with Visa,  MasterCard and several  large banks.
Revised:  A small group of Connecticut retailers filed a similar lawsuit last month naming along with Visa, MasterCard and several other large banks.
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Original:  They claim that technology has lowered the cost of processing the transactions, but the savings are not being passed along to merchants. 
Revised:  They claim that technology has lowered the cost of processing the transactions, but the savings is not being passed along to merchants. 
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Original:  None of the 468 passengers caught in the incidents, which were in seperate years, was injured   
Revised:  None of the 468 passengers caught in the incidents, which were in seperate years, was injured . 
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Original:  The aircraft were later able to continue on their journeys   
Revised:  The aircraft were later able to continue on their journeys . 
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Original:  None of the 468 passengers caught in the incidents, which were in seperate years, was injured.
Revised:  None of the 468 passengers caught in the incidents, which were in seperate years, were injured.
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Original: "A senior general in the Chinese army threatened to use nuclear arms against the United States in a conflict over the Taiwan Strait. . . " " If the Americans draw their missiles and position-guided ammunition onto the target zone on China's territory, I think we will have to respond with nuclear weapons,"
Revised: A General of the Chinese army threatened to use nuclear arms against the United States in a conflict over the Taiwan Strait. . . " " If the Americans draw their missiles and position-guided ammunition onto the target zone on China's territory, I think we will have to respond with nuclear weapons,"
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Original: "A senior general in the Chinese army threatened to use nuclear arms against the United States in a conflict over the Taiwan Strait. . . " " If the Americans draw their missiles and position-guided ammunition onto the target zone on China's territory, I think we will have to respond with nuclear weapons,"
Revised: "A senior general in the Chinese army threatened to use nuclear arms against the United States in a conflict over the Taiwan Strait. " " If the Americans draw their missiles and position-guided ammunition onto the target zone on China's territory, I think we will have to respond with nuclear weapons,"
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Original: "A senior general in the Chinese army threatened to use nuclear arms against the United States in a conflict over the Taiwan Strait. . . " " If the Americans draw their missiles and position-guided ammunition onto the target zone on China's territory, I think we will have to respond with nuclear weapons,"
Revised: "A senior general in the Chinese army threatened to use nuclear arms against the United States in a conflict over the Taiwan Strait. . . " If the Americans draw their missiles and position-guided ammunition onto the target zone on China's territory, I think we will have to respond with nuclear weapons,"
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Original:  Maj. Gen. Zhu Chenghu said in yesterday's editions of the Financial Times and the Asian Wall Street Journal  . " " We Chinese will prepare ourselves for the destruction of all of the cities east of Xian [in central China].
Revised:  Maj. Gen. Zhu Chenghu said to the reporters of the Asian Wall Street Journal . " " We Chinese will prepare ourselves for the destruction of all of the cities east of Xian [in central China].
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