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Original:  In a recent radio address, Mr. Bush has saidthat “The Senate passed a good bill the Protect America Act that would have given our intelligence professionals the tools they need to keep us safe.
Revised:  In a recent radio address, Mr. Bush has saidthat “The Senate passed a good bill that would have given our intelligence professionals the tools they need to keep us safe.
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Original:   On Saturday, in the State Dining Room after the meeting, Mr.Bush said that " This is a different kind of struggle than we've the US has ever faced before.
Revised:  ” On Saturday, in the State Dining Room after the meeting, Mr.Bush said that " This is a different kind of struggle than we've the US has ever faced before.
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Original:   On Saturday, in the State Dining Room after the meeting, Mr.Bush said that " This is a different kind of struggle than we've the US has ever faced before.
Revised:  On Saturday, in the State Dining Room after the meeting, Bush alluded to the challenges facing the U.S. “ This is a different kind of struggle than we've the US has ever faced before.
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Original:   On Saturday, in the State Dining Room after the meeting, Mr.Bush said that " This is a different kind of struggle than we've the US has ever faced before.
Revised:  On Saturday, in the State Dining Room after the meeting, Mr.Bush said that " This is a different kind of struggle than we've ever faced before.
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Original:  And so therefore we worked with Congress to protect - pass the Protect America Act, which everybody knows has expired.
Revised:  And so therefore we worked with Congress to protect — pass the Protect America Act, which everybody knows has expired.
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Original: The MPs inclued Paul Gibson, Upper House president Peter Primrose, and former MPs Kerry Hickey and Grant McBride.
Revised: The MPs included Paul Gibson, Upper House president Peter Primrose, and former MPs Kerry Hickey and Grant McBride.
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Original:  The Government seems to have ignored the positions of the protesters, with Premier Morris Iemma expressing to the first sitting of Paliament for 2008 that his Government's plans would proceed.
Revised:  The Government seems to have ignored the positions of the protesters, with Premier Morris Iemma expressing to the first sitting of Parliament for 2008 that his Government's plans would proceed.
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Original: The New York Philharmonic Orchestra has played a concert in Pyongyang, North Korea in a move which has been hoped to bring better relations between the communist country and the West.
Revised: The New York Philharmonic Orchestra has performed a concert in Pyongyang, North Korea in a move which has been hoped to bring better relations between the communist country and the West.
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Original: The New York Philharmonic Orchestra has played a concert in Pyongyang, North Korea in a move which has been hoped to bring better relations between the communist country and the West.
Revised: The New York Philharmonic Orchestra has played a concert in Pyongyang, North Korea in an effort to improve relations between the communist country and the West.
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Original:  This comes as Eric Clapton has been invited to play Pyongyang in 2009, as an anonymous North Korean official revealed.
Revised:  This comes as Eric Clapton has been invited to play Pyongyang in 2009.
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Original:  Diplomatic tensions are high, as the U.S. tries to broker a deal with North Korea on the issue of nuclear disarmament, an issue which U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice brought up in her recent visit to China.
Revised:  Diplomatic tensions remain high, as the U.S. tries to broker a deal with North Korea on the issue of nuclear disarmament, an issue which U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice brought up in her recent visit to China.
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Original:  The North Korean government allowed unprecedented access to the country for more than 300 people and almost completely unrestricted internet and international telephone calls were allowed, something which is usually highly restricted to members of the public
Revised:  The North Korean government allowed unprecedented access to the country for more than 300 people and almost completely unrestricted internet and international telephone calls were allowed, something which is usually highly restricted 
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Original: Frank Walker, the chief minister of Jersey, a United Kingdom Crown dependency off the coast of Normandy, France, has been forced to deny claims of a cover up after a child's remains were found on the site . Police are currently investigating 27 cases of child abuse on the island , one which recently led to the body of one child being discovered at a care home Haut de la Garenne in St.
Revised: Frank Walker, the chief minister of Jersey, a United Kingdom Crown dependency off the coast of Normandy, France, has been forced to deny claims of a cover up after a child's remains were found . Police are currently investigating 27 cases of child abuse on the island , one which recently led to the body of one child being discovered at a care home Haut de la Garenne in St.
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Original: Frank Walker, the chief minister of Jersey, a United Kingdom Crown dependency off the coast of Normandy, France, has been forced to deny claims of a cover up after a child's remains were found on the site . Police are currently investigating 27 cases of child abuse on the island , one which recently led to the body of one child being discovered at a care home Haut de la Garenne in St.
Revised: Frank Walker, the chief minister of Jersey, a United Kingdom Crown dependency off the coast of Normandy, France, has been forced to deny claims of a cover up after a child's remains were found on the site . Police are currently investigating twenty-seven cases of child abuse on the island , one which recently led to the body of one child being discovered at a care home Haut de la Garenne in St.
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Original: Frank Walker, the chief minister of Jersey, a United Kingdom Crown dependency off the coast of Normandy, France, has been forced to deny claims of a cover up after a child's remains were found on the site . Police are currently investigating 27 cases of child abuse on the island , one which recently led to the body of one child being discovered at a care home Haut de la Garenne in St.
Revised: Frank Walker, the chief minister of Jersey, a United Kingdom Crown dependency off the coast of Normandy, France, has been forced to deny claims of a cover up after a child's remains were found on the site . Police are currently investigating 27 cases of child abuse on the island and recently discovered the body of one child being discovered at a care home Haut de la Garenne in St.
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Original: Frank Walker, the chief minister of Jersey, a United Kingdom Crown dependency off the coast of Normandy, France, has been forced to deny claims of a cover up after a child's remains were found on the site . Police are currently investigating 27 cases of child abuse on the island , one which recently led to the body of one child being discovered at a care home Haut de la Garenne in St.
Revised: Frank Walker, the chief minister of Jersey, a United Kingdom Crown dependency off the coast of Normandy, France, has been forced to deny claims of a cover up after a child's remains were found on the site . Police are currently investigating 27 cases of child abuse on the island , one which recently led to the body of one child at a care home Haut de la Garenne in St.
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Original:  Martin, and with a potential 6 sites in the area where  bodies may be located.
Revised:  Martin, and with a potential six sites in the area where bodies may be located.
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Original:  Martin, and with a potential 6 sites in the area where  bodies may be located.
Revised:  Martin, and with a potential 6 sites in the area where more bodies may be located.
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Original:  200px|Location of Saint Martin on Jersey Builders originally uncovered a body at the care home in 2003 but it was only since an operation investigate child abuse started in 2006 that progress has been made.
Revised:  Builders originally uncovered a body at the care home in 2003 but it was only since an operation investigate child abuse started in 2006 that progress has been made.
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Original:  "None of us imagined that children in Jersey could be abused and mistreated in the way that is being suggested," the w:BBC News| BBC have quoted him as saying.
Revised:  "None of us imagined that children in Jersey could be abused and mistreated in the way that is being suggested," the BBC have quoted him as saying.
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Original:  Mr. Walker told senators that all necessary resources would be use to find the abusers.
Revised:  Walker told senators that all necessary resources would be use to find the abusers.
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Original: It has come to light that Edward Paisnel, a notorious pedophile  used to visit the Haut de la Garenne children's home dressed as Father Christmas.
Revised: It has come to light that Edward Paisnel, a notorious pedophile , used to visit the Haut de la Garenne children's home dressed as Father Christmas.
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Original: Talks to end the violence in Kenya have been put on hold.
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Original:    This is not the first time a country has moved to block YouTube.
Revised:  Wilders' is expected to release a movie about violence in Islamic culture. The film called Fitna would be set 'inside' the Koran, with a book frame surrounding the images and a mix of Koran verses with footage of executions and other violence in Islamic countries such as Iraq, Iran and Saudi-Arabia. In the United States, F.B.I. and the Department of Homeland Security fear that the release of the movie might trigger a worldwide surge of violence, and the . It is expected that the film will show the destruction of a Koran, which is "tantamount to heresy" in Islam, according to the F.B.I./D.H.S. report. The Dutch Prime Minister has said that the movie has caused a serious crisis situation, with several Dutch embassies and companies abroad worrying about safety. Wilders has previously declared that the Koran should be banned, and he has compared it to Hitler's Mein Kampf. This is not the first time a country has moved to block YouTube.
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Original:  Turkey and Thailand both chose to temporarily ban the sites, as did Morocco which blocked the site after a video criticising the country's treatment of Western Saharans was uploaded .
Revised:  Turkey and Thailand both chose to temporarily ban the sites, as did Morocco which blocked the site after a video criticising the country's treatment of Western Saharans was uploaded 
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Original:  The PTA has also blocked websites depicting the controversial cartoons of Muhammad published by a Danish newspaper in 2006, some of which have recently been reprinted
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Original: In the United States, the F.B.I. and the Department of Homeland Security fear that the release of the movie might trigger a worldwide surge of violence.
Revised: In the United States, the w:Federal Bureau of Investigation and the Department of Homeland Security fear that the release of the movie might trigger a worldwide surge of violence.
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Original:  It is expected that the film will show the destruction of a Koran, which is "tantamount to heresy" in Islam, according to the F.B.I. / D.H.S. report.
Revised:  It is expected that the film will show the destruction of a Koran, which is "tantamount to heresy" in Islam, according to the FBI / D.H.S. report.
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Original:  It is expected that the film will show the destruction of a Koran, which is "tantamount to heresy" in Islam, according to the F.B.I. / D.H.S. report.
Revised:  It is expected that the film will show the destruction of a Koran, which is "tantamount to heresy" in Islam, according to the F.B.I. / DHS report.
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Original: In the United States, the w: Federal Bureau of Investigation  and the Department of Homeland Security  fear that the release of the movie might trigger a worldwide surge of violence.
Revised: In the United States, the Federal Bureau of Investigation and the Department of Homeland Security fear that the release of the movie might trigger a worldwide surge of violence.
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Original: In the United States, the w: Federal Bureau of Investigation  and the Department of Homeland Security  fear that the release of the movie might trigger a worldwide surge of violence.
Revised: In the United States, the w: Federal Bureau of Investigation and the Department of Homeland Security (DHS) fear that the release of the movie might trigger a worldwide surge of violence.
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Original:  Massive blackouts occurred throughout the state of Florida shortly after 1:00 p.m. eastern time (18:00 UTC) on Tuesday afternoon.
Revised:  Massive blackouts occurred throughout the state of Florida shortly after 1:00 p.m. Eastern Time (18:00 UTC) on Tuesday afternoon.
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Original:  It is estimated that about four million customers throughout Florida were affected, with many different power companies losing control of their specific grids.
Revised:  It is estimated that as many as four million customers throughout Florida were affected, with many different power companies losing control of their specific grids.
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Original: FPL President Armando Olivera said during an evening press conference that the outage was caused by a fire at the utility's Flagami substation -- not in the utility's nuclear plant at Turkey Point, as reported earlier by some media outlets .
Revised: FPL President Armando Olivera said during an evening press conference that the outage was caused by a fire at the utility's Flagami substation--not in the utility's nuclear plant at Turkey Point, as reported earlier by some media outlets .
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Original:  The event at the utility's Flagami substation--not in the utility's nuclear plant at Turkey Point , as reported earlier by some media outlets--consequently led to the rolling blackouts .
Revised:  The event at the utility's Flagami substation--not in the utility's nuclear plant at Turkey Point .
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Original:  These include Hotmail, Windows Live Messenger and even Xbox Live in some cases  . Problems reportedly began around 6:30 AM East Coast US time.
Revised:  These include Hotmail, Windows Live Messenger and in some cases . Problems reportedly began around 6:30 AM East Coast US time.
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Original:  These include Hotmail, Windows Live Messenger and even Xbox Live in some cases  . Problems reportedly began around 6:30 AM East Coast US time.
Revised:  These include Hotmail, Windows Live Messenger and even Xbox Live in some cases . Problems reportedly began around 6:30 a.m. eastern time.
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Original:  Microsoft have acknowledged the problem and released the following statement: "We are aware that some customers may be experiencing difficulty accessing their Windows Live accounts.
Revised:  "We are aware that some customers may be experiencing difficulty accessing their Windows Live accounts.
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Original: Users worldwide are reporting that they are unable to login to Microsoft's (MS) live services such as Hotmail, Windows Live Messenger  and in some cases Xbox Live.
Revised: Users worldwide are reporting that they are unable to login to Microsoft's (MS) live services such as Hotmail, Windows Live Messenger , and in some cases Xbox Live.
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Original: Constructed inside a mountain and protected by concrete walls, the "doomsday vault" is designed to withstand earthquakes, nuclear warfare, and floods resulting from global warming.
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Original:  Norwegian Prime Minister Jens Stoltenberg said, "With climate change and other forces threatening the diversity of life that sustains our planet, Norway is proud to be playing a central role in creating a facility capable of protecting what are not just seeds, but the fundamental building blocks of human civilization."
Revised:  The Prime Minister said, "With climate change and other forces threatening the diversity of life that sustains our planet, Norway is proud to be playing a central role in creating a facility capable of protecting what are not just seeds, but the fundamental building blocks of human civilization."
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Original: At the opening ceremony, 100 million seeds from 268,000 different samples were placed inside the vault .
Revised: At the opening ceremony, 100 million seeds from 268,000 samples were placed inside the vault .
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Original:  There is room for over 2 billion seeds in the vault .
Revised:  No genetically modified crops were included .
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Original:  It will also serve as a backup to the thousands of other seed banks around the world  
Revised:  It will also serve as a backup to the thousands of other seed banks around the world . 
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Original:  Some crops will be able to last longer, like sorghum, which the Global Crop Diversity Trust says can last almost 20 milleniums .
Revised:  Some crops will be able to last longer, like sorghum, which the Global Crop Diversity Trust says can last almost 20 millenniums .
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Original:  Two of Visa's competitors, American Express and Discover, operate their own networks and are therefore vulnerable to credit risks
Revised:  Two of Visa's competitors, American Express and Discover, operate their own networks and could therefore be vulnerable to credit risks
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Original: Because the international economy's future is bleak, amidst the sub-prime mortgage crisis and the weakening dollar, many investors are skeptical of the large IPO and Visa's potential earnings.
Revised: Analysts have suggested that current economic conditions, the sub-prime mortgage crisis and the weakening dollar, many investors are skeptical of the large IPO and Visa's potential earnings.
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Original: Because the international economy's future is bleak, amidst the sub-prime mortgage crisis and the weakening dollar, many investors are skeptical of the large IPO and Visa's potential earnings.
Revised: Because the international economy's future is bleak, amidst the sub-prime mortgage crisis and the weakening dollar, may leave investors skeptical about Visa's potential earnings.
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Original:  Two of Visa's  competitors, American Express and Discover, operate their own credit-lending networks and could therefore be vulnerable to credit risks
Revised:  Two of Visa's competitors, American Express and Discover, operate their credit-lending networks and could therefore be vulnerable to credit risks
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Original:  Cards will be used for 55 percent of all U.S.  transactions by 2011, up from 40 percent in 2005.
Revised:  Cards are expected to be used for 55 percent of all U.S. transactions by 2011, up from 40 percent in 2005.
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Original:  This would makes it the single biggest IPO in United States history, according to the regulatory filing the company made.
Revised:  This would make it the single biggest IPO in United States history, according to the regulatory filing the company made.
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Original:  Bandić is a head of the coalition list formed by Social Democrat Party of Croatia (SDP), Croatian Peasent Party (HSS), and Croatian Pensioner Party (HUS).
Revised:  Bandić is a head of the coalition list formed by Social Democrat Party of Croatia (SDP), Croatian Peasant Party (HSS), and Croatian Pensioner Party (HUS).
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Original:  According to GONG, an NGO observing the elections, Milan Bandić will be able to form a government in the city of Zagreb, since his list has won around 46\%.
Revised:  According to GONG, an NGO observing the elections, Milan Bandić , can form a government in the city of Zagreb, since his list has won around 46\%.
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Original:  This would give them 27 of 51 seats in the capital city.
Revised:  This would give the coalition 27 of 51 seats in the capital city.
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Original:  the first appearance since the 2003 conference held at the Taiwan Network Information Center (TWNIC).
Revised:  the first appearance since the 2003 conference held by the Taiwan Network Information Center (TWNIC).
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Original:  The twelfth-annual Asia Pacific Regional Internet Conference on Operational Technologies (a.k.a APRICOT) , returned to Taiwan this year at  Taipei Howard Plaza Hotel ;
Revised:  The twelfth-annual Asia Pacific Regional Internet Conference on Operational Technologies (a.k.a APRICOT) returned to Taiwan this year at Taipei Howard Plaza Hotel ;
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Original:  The twelfth-annual Asia Pacific Regional Internet Conference on Operational Technologies (a.k.a APRICOT) , returned to Taiwan this year at  Taipei Howard Plaza Hotel ;
Revised:  The twelfth-annual Asia Pacific Regional Internet Conference on Operational Technologies (a.k.a APRICOT) , returned to Taiwan this year at the Taipei Howard Plaza Hotel ;
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Original:  The twelfth-annual Asia Pacific Regional Internet Conference on Operational Technologies (a.k.a APRICOT) , returned to Taiwan this year at  Taipei Howard Plaza Hotel ;
Revised:  The twelfth-annual Asia Pacific Regional Internet Conference on Operational Technologies (a.k.a APRICOT) , returned to Taiwan this year at Taipei Howard Plaza Hotel . This is
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Original:  ARKive collects media of species, and the All Species Foundation was a failed early attempt at a web catalog  
Revised:  ARKive collects media of species, and the All Species Foundation was a failed early attempt at a web catalog . 
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Original:  " They're risking their reputation, and a charity's reputation is very precious."
Revised:  They're risking their reputation, and a charity's reputation is very precious."
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Original:  " This sounds counterintuitive, but it is the law.
Revised:  This sounds counterintuitive, but it is the law.
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Original: Major British charity has invested money in arms, alcohol and tobacco firms, according to a investigation.
Revised: Major charity has invested money in arms, alcohol and tobacco firms, according to a investigation.
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Original:  The probe discovered evidence of hundreds of thousands of pounds going towards shares in weapons firms like and alcohol company .
Revised:  The probe discovered evidence of hundreds of thousands of going towards shares in weapons firms like and alcohol company .
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Original: A spokesperson for the charity told British broadsheet newspaper : "We put the money into large managed funds, as many other leading charities and pension funds do.
Revised: A spokesperson for the charity told the British newspaper : "We put the money into large managed funds, as many other leading charities and pension funds do.
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Original:  The three men and two women  from climate action group, Plane Stupid.
Revised:  The three men and two women were from climate action group, Plane Stupid.
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Original:  The protesters made paper aeroplanes out of confidential Whitehall documents that , it is claimed show collusion between BAA ( British Airports Authority  ) and the Government department of transport to subvert the public consulation process on the proposed third runway.
Revised:  The protesters made paper aeroplanes out of confidential Whitehall documents that allegedly show collusion between BAA ( British Airports Authority ) and the Government department of transport to subvert the public consulation process on the proposed third runway.
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