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Original: JPG|Statue of Sisavang Vong, King of Luang Phrabang 1904–46, King of Laos 1946–59 (In the grounds of the Royal Palace Museum, Luang Phrabāng)]] Laos might have drifted along as a pleasant backwater of the French Empire indefinitely had it not been for dramatic outside events that heavily impacted the nation from 1940 onwards.
Revised: JPG|Statue of Sisavang Vong, King of Luang Phrabang 1904–46, King of Laos 1946–59 (In the grounds of the Royal Palace Museum, Luang Phrabāng)]] Laos might have drifted along as a backwater of the French Empire indefinitely had it not been for dramatic outside events that heavily impacted the nation from 1940 onwards.
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Original: After an ultimatum was given by Pavie, now resident minister to Siam in URL in August 1892 to the Siamese government, both countries went to war in 1893, culminating in the Paknam incident when France, contrary to promises it had made to Great Britain, entered Bangkok with warships.
Revised: After an ultimatum was given by Pavie, now resident minister to Siam in Bangkok, in August 1892 to the Siamese government, both countries went to war in 1893, culminating in the Paknam incident when France, contrary to promises it had made to Great Britain, entered Bangkok with warships.
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Original:  A history of Laos '' (Cambridge University Press, 1997)
Revised:  A history of Laos (Cambridge University Press, 1997)
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Original:  Confusing notation: was previously defined in terms of and , according to which the numerator above would be 0. Needs clarification.
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Original:  Should indicate how Strain is minimized - Frobenius Distance?
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Original:  Metric MDS minimizes the cost function called “Stress” which is a residual sum of squares: : or, Metric scaling uses a power transformation with a user-controlled exponent : and for distance.
Revised:  Metric MDS minimizes the cost function called “Stress” which is a residual sum of squares: Metric scaling uses a power transformation with a user-controlled exponent : and for distance.
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Original:  For example, given the Euclidean aerial distances between various cities indexed by i and j, you want to find the coordinates of the cities such that . ( In this example, an exact solution is possible (assuming the Euclidean distances are exact).
Revised:  For example, given the Euclidean aerial distances between various cities indexed by i and j, you want to find the coordinates of the cities such that . In this example, an exact solution is possible (assuming the Euclidean distances are exact).
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Original:  General forms of loss functions called Stress in distance MDS and Strain in classical MDS.
Revised:  General forms of loss functions called stress in distance MDS and Strain in classical MDS.
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Original:  General forms of loss functions called Stress in distance MDS and Strain in classical MDS.
Revised:  General forms of loss functions called Stress in distance MDS and strain in classical MDS.
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Original:  The strain is given by: , where now denote vectors in N-dimensional space, denotes the vector product between and , and are the terms of the matrix defined on step 2 of the following algorithm  .
Revised:  The strain is given by: , where now denote vectors in N-dimensional space, denotes the vector product between and , and are the elements of the matrix defined on step 2 of the following algorithm .
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Original: In late 1961, Smith left his job at CBS when a dispute erupted over a documentary titled Who Speaks for Birmingham?.
Revised: In late 1961, Smith left his job at CBS when a dispute erupted over the documentary Who Speaks for Birmingham?.
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Original:  During this period, his son, future ABC newsman, Jack Smith (April 25, 1945 – April 7, 2004), was serving with the U.S. Army 7th Cavalry Regiment in South URL and fought at the Battle of Ia URL These commentaries endeared him to President Nixon, who rewarded him with a rare, hour-long, one-on-one interview in 1971, at the height of the administration's animus against major newspapers, CBS, and NBC, despite Smith's having broadcast his "political obituary" only nine years earlier.
Revised:  During this period, his son, future ABC newsman, Jack Smith (April 25, 1945 – April 7, 2004), was serving with the U.S. Army 7th Cavalry Regiment in South Vietnam and fought at the Battle of Ia URL These commentaries endeared him to President Nixon, who rewarded him with a rare, hour-long, one-on-one interview in 1971, at the height of the administration's animus against major newspapers, CBS, and NBC, despite Smith's having broadcast his "political obituary" only nine years earlier.
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Original: Category:1914 births Category:2002 deaths Category:20th-century American journalists Category:American broadcast news analysts Category:American male film actors Category:  American memoirists Category:American non-fiction writers Category:American radio reporters and correspondents Category:American Rhodes Scholars Category:American television news anchors Category:Burials at Oak Hill Cemetery (Washington, D.C.)
Revised: Category:1914 births Category:2002 deaths Category:20th-century American journalists Category:American broadcast news analysts Category:American male film actors Category: 20th-century American memoirists Category:American non-fiction writers Category:American radio reporters and correspondents Category:American Rhodes Scholars Category:American television news anchors Category:Burials at Oak Hill Cemetery (Washington, D.C.)
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Original:  Category:Cajun people Category:Deaths from pneumonia  Category:People from Bethesda, Maryland Category:People from Ferriday, Louisiana Category:Writers from New Orleans Category:Alcee Fortier High School alumni Category:Tulane University alumni Category:Alumni of Merton College, Oxford
Revised:  Category:Cajun people Category:Deaths from pneumonia in Maryland Category:People from Bethesda, Maryland Category:People from Ferriday, Louisiana Category:Writers from New Orleans Category:Alcee Fortier High School alumni Category:Tulane University alumni Category:Alumni of Merton College, Oxford
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Original:  During this period, his son, future ABC newsman, Jack Smith (April 25, 1945 – April 7, 2004), was serving with the U.S. Army 7th Cavalry Regiment in South Vietnam and fought at the Battle of Ia URL These commentaries endeared him to President Nixon, who rewarded him with a rare, hour-long, one-on-one interview in 1971, at the height of the administration's animus against major newspapers, CBS, and NBC, despite Smith's having broadcast his "political obituary" only nine years earlier.
Revised:  During this period, his son, future ABC newsman, Jack Smith (April 25, 1945 – April 7, 2004), was serving with the U.S. Army 7th Cavalry Regiment in South URL and fought at the Battle of Ia URL These commentaries endeared him to President Nixon, who rewarded him with a rare, hour-long, one-on-one interview in 1971, at the height of the administration's animus against major newspapers, CBS, and NBC, despite Smith's having broadcast his "political obituary" only nine years earlier.
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Original:   Interview-Fusion Works The New Indian Express ;
Revised:  ; Interview-Fusion Works The New Indian Express ;
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Original:   Interview-Fusion Works The New Indian Express ;
Revised:  Interview-Fusion Works The New Indian Express 
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Original:  But in the north , stone and sometimes metal were used.
Revised:  But in the north stone and sometimes metal were used.
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Original: In North Mesopotamia the period runs only between about 5300 and 4300 BC.
Revised: In Northern Mesopotamia the period runs only between about 5300 and 4300 BC.
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Original:  |%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% | combatant2 = Republic of Dagestan Chechen Republic The Chechen–Russian conflict (, Chechenskiy konflikt;
Revised:  |%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Chechen–Russian conflict (, Chechenskiy konflikt;
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Original:  Polish interior minister Mariusz Błaszczak had even gone further, blasting the Chechen refugees as dangerous due to their Islamic beliefs . Poland had already sent back over 78,000 Chechen refugees to Russia in 2016, which was an increase comparing to 18,000 Chechens being denied entry in 2015;
Revised:  Polish interior minister Mariusz Błaszczak had even gone further, blasting the Chechen refugees as dangerous due to its Islamic belief . Poland had already sent back over 78,000 Chechen refugees to Russia in 2016, which was an increase comparing to 18,000 Chechens being denied entry in 2015;
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Original:  Chechen Republic leader Ramzan Kadyrov is suspected of ordering the assassination of Khangoshvili. according to some sources, the United States helped Russia in killing Khangoshvili<ref><ref>
Revised:  Chechen Republic leader Ramzan Kadyrov is suspected of ordering the assassination of Khangoshvili. 
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Original: Ethnic cleansing of Chechens from their homeland [[File:Yermolov statue.jpg|Statue of Aleksey Yermolov in Grozny (ru) with one of his quotes in reference to Chechens: "There is no people more vile and insidious under the sun."
Revised: Exile of Chechens from their homeland [[File:Yermolov statue.jpg|Statue of Aleksey Yermolov in Grozny (ru) with one of his quotes in reference to Chechens: "There is no people more vile and insidious under the sun."
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Original: Ethnic cleansing of Chechens from their homeland [[File:Yermolov statue.jpg|Statue of Aleksey Yermolov in Grozny (ru) with one of his quotes in reference to Chechens: "There is no people more vile and insidious under the sun."
Revised: Ethnic cleansing of Chechens from Chechnya [[File:Yermolov statue.jpg|Statue of Aleksey Yermolov in Grozny (ru) with one of his quotes in reference to Chechens: "There is no people more vile and insidious under the sun."
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Original:  The statue was reinstated in 1949, four years after the Chechens were ethnically cleansed from their homeland , and it stood until 1989.
Revised:  The statue was reinstated in 1949, four years after the the expulsion of the Chechens , and it stood until 1989.
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Original: 1947 births Category:Living people Category:Malayali people Category:People from Kottayam Category:Indian writers  Category:Writers from Kerala Category:Malayalam-language writers Category:Malayalam short story writers Category:Malayalam novelists Category:Recipients of the Kerala Sahitya Akademi Awa
Revised: 1947 births Category:Living people Category:Malayali people Category:People from Kottayam Category:Indian writers Category:Indian short story writers Category:Indian novelists Category:Writers from Kerala Category:Malayalam-language writers Category:Malayalam short story writers Category:Malayalam novelists Category:Recipients of the Kerala Sahitya Akademi Awa
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Original:  born 5 January 1993) is a Russian football midfielder who currently plays as central midfielder for FC Amkar Perm . Category:1993 births Category:People from Nalchik Category:Living people Category:Russian footballers Category:Association football midfielders Category:Balkar people Category:PFC Spartak Nalchik players Category:FC Amkar Perm players Category:Russian Premier League  playe
Revised:  born 5 January 1993) is a Russian football midfielder who currently plays as central midfielder for FC Baltika Kaliningrad . Category:1993 births Category:People from Nalchik Category:Living people Category:Russian footballers Category:Association football midfielders Category:Balkar people Category:PFC Spartak Nalchik players Category:FC Amkar Perm players Category:Russian Premier League playe
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Original:  born 5 January 1993) is a Russian football midfielder who currently plays as central midfielder for FC Baltika Kaliningrad .
Revised:  born 5 January 1993) is a Russian football midfielder who plays as central midfielder for FC Baltika Kaliningrad .
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Original:  born 5 January 1993) is a Russian football midfielder who currently plays as central midfielder for FC Baltika Kaliningrad .
Revised:  born 5 January 1993) is a Russian football midfielder who currently plays as central midfielder .
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Original:  born 5 January 1993) is a Russian football midfielder who plays as central midfielder  . Category:1993 births Category:People from Nalchik Category:Living people Category:Russian footballers Category:Association football midfielders Category:Balkar people Category:PFC Spartak Nalchik players Category:FC Amkar Perm players Category:  Russian Premier League players Category: FC Baltika Kaliningrad playe
Revised:  born 5 January 1993) is a Russian football midfielder who plays as central midfielder for FC Fakel Voronezh . Category:1993 births Category:People from Nalchik Category:Living people Category:Russian footballers Category:Association football midfielders Category:Balkar people Category:PFC Spartak Nalchik players Category:FC Amkar Perm players Category: Russian Premier League players Category: FC Baltika Kaliningrad playe
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Original:  One of Spencer's great-grandsons, Richard Harry Ramsay Spencer, was named the 6th Baron Churchill of Whichwood on 18th October 2017.
Revised:  One of Spencer's great-grandsons, Richard Harry Ramsay Spencer, was named the 6th Baron Churchill of Whichwood on 18 October 2017.
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Original:  Robert Spencer Liddell, son of Sir John Liddell, KCB, MD Caroline Laura Spencer, (b. 1844) Elizabeth Maria Spencer, (b. 1845) Augusta Melita Spencer, (b. 1848), married first , Col.
Revised:  Robert Spencer Liddell, son of Sir John Liddell, KCB, MD Caroline Laura Spencer, (b. 1844) Elizabeth Maria Spencer, (b. 1845) Augusta Melita Spencer, (b. 1848), married firstly , Col.
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Original:  Sir Augustus Almeric Spencer GCB (25 March 1807 – 28 August 1893) was a British Army officer and a member of the Spencer family.
Revised:  Sir Augustus Almeric Spencer (25 March 1807 – 28 August 1893) was a British Army officer and a member of the Spencer family.
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Original: 2008 deaths Category:People from Pathanamthitta Category:Indian male novelists Category:Writers from Kerala Category:Malayali people Category:Malayalam-language writers Category:Malayalam novelists Category:Malayalam short story writers Category:Malayalam poets Category:Pedestrian road incident deaths Category:Road incident deaths in India Category:20th-century Indian novelists Category:20th-century short story writers Category:Indian male short story writers Category:20th-century Indian  poe
Revised: 2008 deaths Category:People from Pathanamthitta Category:Indian male novelists Category:Writers from Kerala Category:Malayali people Category:Malayalam-language writers Category:Malayalam novelists Category:Malayalam short story writers Category:Malayalam poets Category:Pedestrian road incident deaths Category:Road incident deaths in India Category:20th-century Indian novelists Category:20th-century short story writers Category:Indian male short story writers Category:20th-century Indian short story writers Category:20th-century Indian poe
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Original: People from Pathanamthitta Category:Indian male novelists Category: Writers from Kerala Category:Malayali people Category:Malayalam-language writers Category:Malayalam novelists Category:Malayalam short story writers Category:Malayalam poets Category:Pedestrian road incident deaths Category:Road incident deaths in India Category:20th-century Indian novelists Category:Indian male short story writers Category:20th-century Indian short story writers Category:20th-century Indian poe
Revised: People from Pathanamthitta Category:Indian male novelists Category: Novelists from Kerala Category:Malayali people Category:Malayalam-language writers Category:Malayalam novelists Category:Malayalam short story writers Category:Malayalam poets Category:Pedestrian road incident deaths Category:Road incident deaths in India Category:20th-century Indian novelists Category:Indian male short story writers Category:20th-century Indian short story writers Category:20th-century Indian poe
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Original: People from Pathanamthitta Category:Indian male novelists Category:Novelists from Kerala Category:Malayali people Category:Malayalam-language writers Category:Malayalam novelists Category:Malayalam short story writers Category:Malayalam poets Category:Pedestrian road incident deaths Category:Road incident deaths in India Category:20th-century Indian novelists Category:Indian male short story writers Category:20th-century Indian short story writers Category:20th-century Indian poe
Revised: People from Pathanamthitta Category:Indian male novelists Category:Novelists from Kerala Category:Malayali people Category:Malayalam-language writers Category:Malayalam novelists Category:Malayalam short story writers Category:Malayalam poets Category:Pedestrian road incident deaths Category:Road incident deaths in India Category:20th-century Indian novelists Category:Indian male short story writers Category:20th-century Indian short story writers Category:20th-century male write
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Original: His grandson Jemin Jom Ayyaneth is a cinematographer in films.
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Original: Mbuvi is a Kenyan award-winning contemporary gospel singer, comedian and TV URL Born Victor Mbuvi, he drew his love for music from his childhood and inspiration from his mother who passed away in 1999, a year before Mbuvi launched his music career.
Revised: Mbuvi is a Kenyan award-winning contemporary gospel singer, comedian and TV URL Born Victor Mbuvi, he drew his love for music from his childhood and inspiration from his mother who died in 1999, a year before Mbuvi launched his music career.
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Original:  He later joined Lenana School, where I played rugby.
Revised:  He later joined Lenana School, where he played rugby.
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Original:  I then joined Moi University for a Bachelor of Science degree in Physics and later pursued a Master’s degree in Computer Based Information Systems, at the University of Sunderland, UK.
Revised:  He then joined Moi University for a Bachelor of Science degree in Physics and later pursued a Master’s degree in Computer Based Information Systems, at the University of Sunderland, UK.
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Original:  In 2001, he briefly teamed up with music producer R Kay and a friend to form Injili Group, which recorded Nisamehe - his first ever hit URL
Revised:  In 2001, he briefly teamed up with music producer R Kay and a friend to form Injili Group, which recorded Nisamehe - his first ever hit song.
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Original: Mbuvi is a Kenyan award-winning contemporary gospel singer, comedian, Philanthropist and TV URL Born Victor Mbuvi, he drew his love for music from his childhood and inspiration from his mother who died in 1999, a year before Mbuvi launched his music career.
Revised: Mbuvi is a Kenyan award-winning contemporary gospel singer, comedian, and TV URL Born Victor Mbuvi, he drew his love for music from his childhood and inspiration from his mother who died in 1999, a year before Mbuvi launched his music career.
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Original:  In 2001, he briefly teamed up with music producer R Kay and a friend to form Injili Group, which recorded Nisamehe - his first ever hit song.
Revised:  In 2001, he briefly teamed up with music producer R Kay and a friend to form Injili Group, which recorded Nisamehe – his first ever hit song.
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Original:  He then joined Moi University for a Bachelor of Science degree in Physics and later pursued a Master ’ s degree in Computer Based Information Systems, at the University of Sunderland, UK.
Revised:  He then joined Moi University for a Bachelor of Science degree in Physics and later pursued a Master ' s degree in Computer Based Information Systems, at the University of Sunderland, UK.
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Original:  Mbuvi joined a group called His Image, who performed a cappella and various renditions of other artistes’ URL We even modernised a Luo gospel folk song Niwara Nono.
Revised:  Mbuvi joined a group called His Image, who performed a cappella and various renditions of other artistes’ works. We even modernised a Luo gospel folk song Niwara Nono.
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Original: Mbuvi is a Kenyan award-winning contemporary gospel singer, comedian, and TV URL Born Victor Mbuvi, he drew his love for music from his childhood and inspiration from his mother who died in 1999, a year before Mbuvi launched his music career.
Revised: Mbuvi is a Kenyan award-winning contemporary gospel singer, comedian, and TV presenter. Born Victor Mbuvi, he drew his love for music from his childhood and inspiration from his mother who died in 1999, a year before Mbuvi launched his music career.
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Original:  Mbuvi however decided to pursue his music career instead of what he had URL Awards 2011 Kisima Music Awards, Benga Artiste of the Year Groove Awards, Eastern Song of the Year (2010) Groove Awards, Traditional Song of the Year (2009) Kisima Music Awards, Ethnic Fusion Artiste of the year (2008) Kisima Music Awards, R&B Artiste of the Year URL TV Hosting In 2008, Mbuvi hosted a TV called "The Day" on DSTV channel URL
Revised:  Mbuvi however decided to pursue his music career instead of what he had studied. Awards 2011 Kisima Music Awards, Benga Artiste of the Year Groove Awards, Eastern Song of the Year (2010) Groove Awards, Traditional Song of the Year (2009) Kisima Music Awards, Ethnic Fusion Artiste of the year (2008) Kisima Music Awards, R&B Artiste of the Year URL TV Hosting In 2008, Mbuvi hosted a TV called "The Day" on DSTV channel URL
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Original: Among the Hindus of Jammu  province, who numbered 626,177 (or 90.87\% of the Hindu population of the princely state), the most important castes recorded in the census were "Brahmans (186,000), the Rajputs (167,000), the Khattris (48,000) and the Thakkars (93,000)."
Revised: Among the Hindus of Jammu '' province, who numbered 626,177 (or 90.87\% of the Hindu population of the princely state), the most important castes recorded in the census were "Brahmans (186,000), the Rajputs (167,000), the Khattris (48,000) and the Thakkars (93,000)."
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Original:  Ghose, D. K. "Source-Material for the History of Kashmir (Second Half of the Nineteenth Century)," Quarterly Review of Historical Studies (1969) 9#1 pp 7–12. covers 1846 to 1997 Lone, Fozia Nazir.
Revised:  covers 1846 to 1997 Lone, Fozia Nazir.
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Original: In the first half of the 1st millennium, the Kashmir region became an important centre of Buddhism and later of Hinduism ;
Revised: In the first half of the 1st millennium, the Kashmir region became an important centre of Hinduism and later of Hinduism ;
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Original: In the first half of the 1st millennium, the Kashmir region became an important centre of Buddhism and later of Hinduism ;
Revised: In the first half of the 1st millennium, the Kashmir region became an important centre of Buddhism and later of Buddhism ;
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Original:  Islam then came to Kashmir during 13th to 15th century by sufi saints and led to the eventual decline of the Kashmir Shaivism in Kashmir.
Revised:  Islam then came to Kashmir during 13th to 15th century and led to the eventual decline of the Kashmir Shaivism in Kashmir.
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Original: In the first half of the 1st millennium, the Kashmir region became an important centre of Hinduism and later of Buddhism ;
Revised: In the first half of the 1st millennium, the Kashmir region became an important centre of Buddhism and later of Buddhism ;
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Original: In the first half of the 1st millennium, the Kashmir region became an important centre of Hinduism and later of Buddhism ;
Revised: In the first half of the 1st millennium, the Kashmir region became an important centre of Hinduism and later of Hinduism ;
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