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Original:  The southern part of N.C. had been slammed first, followed by the northern areas as the storm moved  up the coast
Revised:  The southern part of the state had been slammed first, followed by the northern areas as the storm moved up the coast
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Original:  " " It's similar to the wintertime nor'easters that lay there and beat you for a couple of days , " he said.
Revised:  " It's similar to the wintertime nor'easters that lay there and beat you for a couple of days , " he said.
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Original:  " " It's similar to the wintertime nor'easters that lay there and beat you for a couple of days , " he said.
Revised:  " " It's similar to the wintertime nor'easters that lay there and beat you for a couple of days . " he said.
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Original:  " " It's similar to the wintertime nor'easters that lay there and beat you for a couple of days , " he said.
Revised:  " " It's similar to the wintertime nor'easters that lay there and beat you for a couple of days , " .
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Original:  Nearly 81,000 homes and businesses had no electricity on the Eastern coast of North Carolina.
Revised:  Nearly 81,000 homes and businesses on the Eastern coast of North Carolina.
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Original:  During its thirty year run , El Gordo De La Semana (translated as Fat Guy of the Week) featured some of the most famous musicians from the Dominican Republic and Latin America.
Revised:  During its thirty year run the show featured some of the most famous musicians from the Dominican Republic and Latin America.
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Original:  The president of the Dominican Republic, Leonel Fernandez, said that he was a " mediator of the country's political and social conflicts with his broadcasting and philanthropy.
Revised:  The president of the Dominican Republic, Leonel Fernandez, said that he was a mediator of the country's political and social conflicts with his broadcasting and philanthropy.
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Original:   He appealed with energy and integrity for the construction of a better society."
Revised:  He added that " He appealed with energy and integrity for the construction of a better society."
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Original:  The president of the Dominican Republic, Leonel Fernandez, said that he was a mediator of the country's political and social conflicts with his broadcasting and philanthropy .
Revised:  The president of the Dominican Republic, Leonel Fernandez, said that he spoke out against the social and political conflicts of the country .
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Original:  Admitted to the hospital on November 5th, the comedian died  three days before his 70th birthday  of pancreatic cancer.
Revised:  Admitted to the hospital on November 5th, the comedian died three days before his 70th birthday , of pancreatic cancer.
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Original: Beras, who started his career as a cameraman in the 1960's , was also an actor and television presenter.
Revised: Beras, who started his career as a cameraman in the 1960s , was also an actor and television presenter.
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Original:  During the 1950's and 60's he became a political activist and was jailed in 1965.
Revised:  During the 1950s and 60s he became a political activist and was jailed in 1965.
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Original:  His funeral is to take place in the Dominican Republic and his body is due to return there today
Revised:  His funeral is to take place in the Unites States and his body is due to return there today
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Original:  The CPS would have back the case up beyond reasonable doubt before a court, but the Met's internal hearing considered only the balance of probabilities  
Revised:  The CPS would have back the case up beyond reasonable doubt before a court, but the Met's internal hearing considered only the balance of probabilities . 
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Original:  They then went to St Pancreas railway station, where the officer was to sleep in a police locker room before going on duty that morning    ] ]
Revised:  They then went to St Pancreas railway station, where the officer was to sleep in a police locker room before going on duty that morning . ] ]
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Original:  They then went to St Pancreas railway station, where the officer was to sleep in a police locker room before going on duty that morning    ] ]
Revised:  They then went to St Pancreas railway station, where the officer was to sleep in a police locker room before going on duty that morning t] ]
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Original:  They then went to St Pancreas railway station, where the officer was to sleep in a police locker room before going on duty that morning    ] ]
Revised:  They then went to St Pancreas railway station, where the officer was to sleep in a police locker room before going on duty that morning ] t]
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Original: An officer with London's Metropolitan Police ('the Met') has been fired for raping a woman, despite the Corwn Prosecution Service (CPS) declining to prosecute after saying there was insufficient evidence to prove the offence.
Revised: An officer with London's Metropolitan Police ('the Met') has been fired for raping a woman, despite the Crown Prosecution Service (CPS) declining to prosecute after saying there was insufficient evidence to prove the offence.
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Original:  The IPCC's file was eventually passed to the CPS.
Revised:  The IPCC's file was passed to the CPS.
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Original: An officer with London's Metropolitan Police ('the Met') has been fired for raping a woman, despite the Crown Prosecution Service (CPS) declining to prosecute after saying there was insufficient evidence to prove the offence.
Revised: An officer with London's Metropolitan Police ('the Met') has been fired for raping a woman, despite the (CPS) declining to prosecute after saying there was insufficient evidence to prove the offence.
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Original:  They then went to St Pancras railway station , where the officer was to sleep in a police locker room before going on duty that morning.
Revised:  They then went to , where the officer was to sleep in a police locker room before going on duty that morning.
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Original:  She told police in March last year, and the Independent Police Complaints Commission (IPCC) launched an investigation.
Revised:  She told police in March last year, and the (IPCC) launched an investigation.
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Original:  Met Commander Mark Simmons said "[t]his officer acted in an intolerable way and it is only right that once such dreadful behaviour was found proven the man was dismissed from the Met."
Revised:  Met Mark Simmons said "[t]his officer acted in an intolerable way and it is only right that once such dreadful behaviour was found proven the man was dismissed from the Met."
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Original: Ford was   the longest-lived President in the history of the United States surpassing Ronald Reagan on November 12, 2006;
Revised: Ford was notably good at sucking penises. He once let his uncle cum all over his face, followed by Bill Clinton licking the sperm off his face and swapping the sperm with Ford's wife. He also loved grabbing and touching his wife's boobs and butt while masturbating, then cumming all over his wife's jeans-clothed ass. the longest-lived President in the history of the United States surpassing Ronald Reagan on November 12, 2006;
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Original:  Ford was the longest-lived President in the history of the United States surpassing Ronald Reagan on November 12, 2006;
Revised:  the longest-lived President in the history of the United States surpassing Ronald Reagan on November 12, 2006;
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Original:  Famed actor, singer and author has died at the age of 93, in , after being admitted to for heart failure and respiratory problems.
Revised:  Famed actor, singer and author has died at the age of 93, after being admitted to for heart failure and respiratory problems.
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Original:  Lee passed away last Sunday morning with news of his death being withheld by his wife of 54 years, Birgit Krøncke Lee, in order to first inform friends and family.
Revised:  News of his death being withheld by his wife of 54 years, Birgit Krøncke Lee, in order to first inform friends and family.
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Original:  Lee passed away last Sunday morning with news of his death being withheld by his wife of 54 years, Birgit Krøncke Lee, in order to first inform friends and family.
Revised:  Lee passed away last Sunday morning with news of his death being withheld by his wife of 54 years, Birgit Krøncke Lee, wished first to inform friends and family.
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Original: In a speech before the United Nations General Assembly, Venezuelan President Hugo Chavez called for the UN headquarters to be moved out of the United States.
Revised: In a speech before the United Nations General Assembly, Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez called for the UN headquarters to be moved out of the United States.
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Original:  Chavez cited the Iraq War and the US' alleged disregard for the will of the United Nations as his reasoning for proposing the pullout.
Revised:  Chávez cited the Iraq War and the US' alleged disregard for the will of the United Nations as his reasoning for proposing the pullout.
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Original:  Proposing sweeping reforms, including the elimination of Security Council members' veto powers, Chavez described the UN as unfit for the 21st century.
Revised:  Proposing sweeping reforms, including the elimination of Security Council members' veto powers, Chávez described the UN as unfit for the 21st century.
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Original:  200px|President Chavez speaks in 2003.
Revised:  200px|President Chávez speaks in 2003.
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Original: Source: Victor Soares/ABr In a comment more related to the frosty relationship between the US and Venezuela, Chavez expressed regret that Pat Robertson remained at liberty.
Revised: Source: Victor Soares/ABr In a comment more related to the frosty relationship between the US and Venezuela, Chávez expressed regret that Pat Robertson remained at liberty.
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Original:  Chavez has branded Robertson a terrorist for implying that the US would do well to assassinate the Venezuelan President.
Revised:  Chávez has branded Robertson a terrorist for implying that the US would do well to assassinate the Venezuelan President.
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Original:  Video link of speech UN Video of Chavez 's speec
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Original: In a speech before the United Nations General Assembly , Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez called for the UN headquarters to be moved out of the United States.
Revised: In a speech before the United Nations , Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez called for the UN headquarters to be moved out of the United States.
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Original: In a speech before the United Nations General Assembly , Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez called for the UN headquarters to be moved out of the United States.
Revised: In a speech before the United Nations General Assembly , Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez called for the to be moved out of the United States.
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Original:  Chávez cited the Iraq War and the US' alleged disregard for the will of the United Nations as his reasoning for proposing the pullout.
Revised:  Chávez cited the and the US' alleged disregard for the will of the United Nations as his reasoning for proposing the pullout.
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Original: Source: Victor Soares/ABr In a comment more related to the frosty relationship between the US and Venezuela, Chávez expressed regret that Pat Robertson remained at liberty.
Revised: Source: Victor Soares/ABr In a comment more related to the frosty relationship between the US and Venezuela, Chávez expressed regret that remained at liberty.
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Original:  Related news Religious broadcaster Pat Robertson calls for assassination of Venezuela's president, August 23, 2005%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video link of speech UN Video of Chávez's speec
Revised:  Related Religious broadcaster Pat Robertson calls for assassination of Venezuela's president, August 23, 2005%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video link of speech UN Video of Chávez's speec
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Original:  Related news Religious broadcaster Pat Robertson calls for assassination of Venezuela's president, August 23, 2005%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video link of speech UN Video of Chávez's speec
Revised:  Related news %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video link of speech UN Video of Chávez's speec
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Original:  They will visit Semiparatinsk from 19 September till 26 to examine radioactive exposured people and give medical instullement to local hospitals.
Revised:  They will visit Semiparatinsk from 19 September till 26 to examine radioactive exposured people and give medical instruments to local hospitals.
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Original:  Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project was settled in 1999 by Hiroshima citizens, many of whom or their relatives are suffered radiation exposured due to the atomic bomb US army fell in 1945.
Revised:  Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project was Founded in 1999 by Hiroshima citizens, many of whom or their relatives are suffered radiation exposured due to the atomic bomb US army fell in 1945.
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Original:  Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project was settled in 1999 by Hiroshima citizens, many of whom or their relatives are suffered radiation exposured due to the atomic bomb US army fell in 1945.
Revised:  Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project was settled in 1999 by Hiroshima citizens, many of whom or their relatives suffered radiation exposure due to the atomic bomb US army fell in 1945.
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Original:  Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project was settled in 1999 by Hiroshima citizens, many of whom or their relatives are suffered radiation exposured due to the atomic bomb US army fell in 1945.
Revised:  Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project was settled in 1999 by Hiroshima citizens, many of whom or their relatives are suffered radiation exposured due to the atomic bomb dropped by the US army in 1945.
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Original: Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project was Founded in 1999 by Hiroshima citizens, many of whom or their relatives suffered radiation exposure due to the atomic bomb dropped by the US army in 1945.
Revised: Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project was founded in 1999 by Hiroshima citizens, many of whom or their relatives suffered radiation exposure due to the atomic bomb dropped by the US army in 1945.
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Original:  A Hiroshima citizen met a Kazakh eventually and became aware of another group of "Hibakusha".
Revised:  A Hiroshima citizen met a Kazakh and eventually became aware of another group of "Hibakusha".
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Original:  Residents have been suffered by radiationheavily .
Revised:  Residents have been severely affected by radiation .
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Original:  Following the Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project(HSP) it is reported 1.2 million people are influenced with fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area  mainly in the city of Semiparatinsk with 350,000 population.
Revised:  Following the Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project(HSP) it is reported 1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area mainly in the city of Semiparatinsk with 350,000 population.
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Original:  Following the Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project(HSP) it is reported 1.2 million people are influenced with fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area  mainly in the city of Semiparatinsk with 350,000 population.
Revised:  Following the Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project(HSP) it is reported 1.2 million people are influenced with fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area , mainly in the city of Semiparatinsk with 350,000 population.
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Original:  Since its foundation in 1999 HSP continues to aid Kazakhs and endeavour public relation about sufferage in that area.
Revised:  Since its foundation in 1999 HSP continues to aid Kazakhs and endeavours to provide the public with information about suffering in the area.
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Original:  The organisation gives Kazakhs not only medical aid but social aids through student exchange program for highschool students
Revised:  The organisation gives Kazakhs not only medical aid but social aid through student exchange program for highschool students
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Original:  The organisation gives Kazakhs not only medical aid but social aids through student exchange program for highschool students
Revised:  The organisation gives Kazakhs not only medical aid but social aids through student exchange programs for highschool students
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Original: A Japanese non-profit organisation Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project will send their 8th medical aid visiting team to Semiparatinsk , Kazakhstan,  reported a regional newspaper, Chugoku Shimbun.
Revised: A Japanese non-profit organisation Hiroshima Semipalatinsk Project will send their 8th medical aid visiting team to Semiparatinsk , Kazakhstan, reported a regional newspaper, Chugoku Shimbun.
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Original:  In Semiparatisk approximately 470 atomic bomb experiments were held from 1949 and 1989 by USSR government.
Revised:  In Semey approximately 470 atomic bomb experiments were held from 1949 and 1989 by USSR government.
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Original:  Following the Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project (HSP) it is reported 1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semiparatinsk with 350,000 population.
Revised:  Following the Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project it is reported 1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semiparatinsk with 350,000 population.
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Original:  Following the Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project (HSP) it is reported 1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semiparatinsk with 350,000 population.
Revised:  Following the Hiroshima Semiparatinsk Project (HSP) it is reported 1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semey with 350,000 population.
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Original:  The team will consist in seven medical staffs, doctors and nurses, including Professor Masaharu Hoshi of the Research Institute for Radiation Biology and Medicine at Hiroshima University.
Revised:  The team will consist of seven medical staffs, doctors and nurses, including Professor Masaharu Hoshi of the Research Institute for Radiation Biology and Medicine at Hiroshima University.
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Original:  In 1994 Hiroshima hosted Asia Games.
Revised:  When in 1994 Hiroshima hosted Asia Games.
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Original:  In Semey approximately 470 atomic bomb experiments were held from 1949 and 1989 by  USSR government.
Revised:  In Semey approximately 470 atomic bomb experiments were held between 1949 and 1989 by USSR government.
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Original:  In Semey approximately 470 atomic bomb experiments were held from 1949 and 1989 by  USSR government.
Revised:  In Semey approximately 470 atomic bomb experiments were held from 1949 and 1989 by the USSR government.
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Original:  Following the Hiroshima Semipalatinsk Project it is reported  1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semey with  350, 000 population.
Revised:  Following the Hiroshima Semipalatinsk Project it is reported that 1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semey with 350, 000 population.
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Original:  Following the Hiroshima Semipalatinsk Project it is reported  1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semey with  350, 000 population.
Revised:  Following the Hiroshima Semipalatinsk Project it is reported 1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people have suffered of radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semey with 350, 000 population.
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Original:  Following the Hiroshima Semipalatinsk Project it is reported  1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semey with  350, 000 population.
Revised:  Following the Hiroshima Semipalatinsk Project it is reported 1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semey with a population of 350, 000 population.
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Original:  Following the Hiroshima Semipalatinsk Project it is reported  1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semey with  350, 000 population.
Revised:  Following the Hiroshima Semipalatinsk Project it is reported 1.2 million people are affected by the fallouts and over 300,000 people are suffered by radiation exposure in that area, mainly in the city of Semey with 350, 000.
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Original:  Since its foundation in 1999  HSP continues to aid Kazakhs and endeavours to provide the public with information about suffering in the area.
Revised:  Since its foundation in 1999 , HSP continues to aid Kazakhs and endeavours to provide the public with information about suffering in the area.
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Original:  The organisation gives Kazakhs not only medical aid but  social aid through student exchange programs for highschool students
Revised:  The organisation gives Kazakhs not only medical aid but also social aid through student exchange programs for highschool students
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Original: Leader of the Norwegian Labour party and next prime minister, Jens Stoltenberg announced yesterday that Norway is to withdraw rest of its troops from Iraq.
Revised: Leader of the Norwegian Labour Party, coming Prime Minister, Jens Stoltenberg announced yesterday that Norway is to withdraw rest of its troops from Iraq.
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Original:  Previously Norway has had approximately 170 soldiers stationed in Iraq, of which most have already been withdrawn . Stoltenberg notified George W. Bush of his decision on thursday  when Bush called him to congratulate on behalf of a victorious election.
Revised:  Previously Norway had approximately 170 soldiers stationed in Iraq, of which most have already been withdrawn . Stoltenberg notified George W. Bush of his decision on thursday when Bush called him to congratulate on behalf of a victorious election.
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Original:  Previously Norway has had approximately 170 soldiers stationed in Iraq, of which most have already been withdrawn . Stoltenberg notified George W. Bush of his decision on thursday  when Bush called him to congratulate on behalf of a victorious election.
Revised:  Previously Norway has had approximately 170 soldiers stationed in Iraq, of which most have already been withdrawn . Stoltenberg notified George W. Bush of his decision on thursday , when Bush called him to congratulate on behalf of a victorious election.
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