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Original:   Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include:  Firewatch (2016),  Heaven's Vault (2019 ), Journey (2012 ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
Revised:  Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include: Journey (2012), Firewatch (2016), Heaven's Vault (2019 ), Journey (2012 ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
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Original:   Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include:  Firewatch (2016),  Heaven's Vault (2019 ), Journey (2012 ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
Revised:  Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include: Firewatch (2016), Heaven's Vault (2019 ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
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Original:  Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include: Journey (2012), Firewatch (2016), The Long Dark (2017), Heaven's Vault (2019  ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
Revised:  Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include: Firewatch (2016), The Long Dark (2017), Heaven's Vault (2019 ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
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Original:  Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include: Journey (2012), Firewatch (2016), The Long Dark (2017), Heaven's Vault (2019  ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
Revised:  Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include: Journey (2012), Firewatch (2016), Heaven's Vault (2019 ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
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Original:  Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include: Journey (2012), Firewatch (2016), The Long Dark (2017), Heaven's Vault (2019  ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
Revised:  Some games that can be considered examples of "slow gaming" include: Journey (2012), Firewatch (2016), The Long Dark (2017), Heaven's Vault (2019 ), Journey (2012 ), Wanderlust Travel Stories (2019), and The Longing (2020).
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Original: Opposed to the culture of fast food, the sub-movement known as slow food seeks to encourage the enjoyment of regional produce and traditional foods, which are often grown organically and to enjoy these foods in the company of others.
Revised: As opposed to the culture of fast food, the sub-movement known as slow food seeks to encourage the enjoyment of regional produce and traditional foods, which are often grown organically and to enjoy these foods in the company of others.
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Original: Joseph Ganapathiplackal Abraham (born 11 September 1981) is an Indian track and field athlete from Kerala.
Revised: Joseph Abraham (born 11 September 1981) is an Indian track and field athlete from Kerala.
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Original:  Broom's lawyers argued that his first execution attempt was cruel and unusual punishment, and that executing him would mean that his evidence would be "irretrievably lost" for their broader lawsuit challenging the constitutionality of Ohio’s lethal injection procedure.
Revised:  His lawyers argued that his first execution attempt was cruel and unusual punishment, and that executing him would mean that his evidence would be "irretrievably lost" for their broader lawsuit challenging the constitutionality of Ohio’s lethal injection procedure.
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Original: Togia-Pulu-toaki was the eighth and possibly final patu-iki (king) of the Pacific Ocean island of Niue, taking power in 1896 following the death of the previous incumbent, Fata-a-iki, and formally ordained on June 30, 1898.
Revised: Togia-Pule-toaki was the eighth and possibly final patu-iki (king) of the Pacific Ocean island of Niue, taking power in 1896 following the death of the previous incumbent, Fata-a-iki, and formally ordained on June 30, 1898.
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Original:  Under Togia-Pulu-toaki 's reign, laws were adopted forbidding the sale of Niuean lands to foreigners, and the sale of liquor to Niueans.
Revised:  Under Togia-Pule-toaki 's reign, laws were adopted forbidding the sale of Niuean lands to foreigners, and the sale of liquor to Niueans.
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Original:  Togia-Pulu-toaki remained alive in Niue in 1903, when Stephenson Percy Smith published his study on the island, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People.
Revised:  Togia-Pule-toaki remained alive in Niue in 1903, when Stephenson Percy Smith published his study on the island, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People.
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Original: Togia-Pule-toaki remained alive in Niue in 1903, when Stephenson Percy Smith published his study on the island, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People.
Revised: Togia-Pule-toaki remained alive in Niue in 1903, when Percy Smith published his study on the island, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People.
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Original:  His reign saw the formal relinquishing of Niuean independence to the British Empire on April 21, But there still remained a Patu ikior king, the successor is Haetaua.
Revised:  His reign saw the formal relinquishing of Niuean independence to the British Empire on April 21, But there still remained a Patu iki or king, the successor is Haetaua.
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Original:  The Niue Kingdoms dynasty was succeeded by Patu iki Haetaua who has living descendants to this day, they are also known as the Kahui Patu liki, or ( Royal Family of the last Monarch of Niue ) . Sources S. Percy Smith, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People, 1903, pp. 36–44
Revised:  The Niuean Kingdom's dynasty was succeeded by Patu iki Haetaua who has living descendants to this day, they are also known as the Kahui Patu liki, or ( Royal Family of the last Monarch of Niue ) . Sources S. Percy Smith, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People, 1903, pp. 36–44
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Original:  The Niue Kingdoms dynasty was succeeded by Patu iki Haetaua who has living descendants to this day, they are also known as the Kahui Patu liki, or ( Royal Family of the last Monarch of Niue ) . Sources S. Percy Smith, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People, 1903, pp. 36–44
Revised:  The Niue Kingdoms dynasty was succeeded by Patu iki Haetaua who has living descendants to this day, they are also known as the Kahui Patu liki, or Royal Family of the last Monarch of Niue ) . Sources S. Percy Smith, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People, 1903, pp. 36–44
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Original:  The Niue Kingdoms dynasty was succeeded by Patu iki Haetaua who has living descendants to this day, they are also known as the Kahui Patu liki, or ( Royal Family of the last Monarch of Niue ) . Sources S. Percy Smith, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People, 1903, pp. 36–44
Revised:  The Niue Kingdoms dynasty was succeeded by Patu iki Haetaua who has living descendants to this day, they are also known as the Kahui Patu liki, or ( Royal Family of the last Monarch of Niue . Sources S. Percy Smith, Niuē-fekai (or Savage) Island and its People, 1903, pp. 36–44
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Original:  As of 11 April  2018, Devika is selected as assistant coach for Bangladesh women international cricket team.
Revised:  As of 11 April , 2018, Devika is selected as assistant coach for Bangladesh women international cricket team.
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Original: Rekha Punekar (Devanagari:रेखा पुणेकर) is a former Test and One Day International cricketer who represented India.
Revised: Rekha Punekar is a former Test and One Day International cricketer who represented India.
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Original: Lopamudra Bhattacharj (Devanagari: लोपामुद्रा भात्ताचार्ज;
Revised: Lopamudra Bhattacharji (Devanagari: लोपामुद्रा भात्ताचार्ज;
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Original: Lopamudra Bhattacharji ( Devanagari: लोपामुद्रा भात्ताचार्ज;
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Original: History In 1985, a group of British optometrists and dispensing opticians each took two weeks out of their businesses to establish clinics in Tanzania, where they tested the eyes of local people and dispensed second-hand spectacles collected in UK.
Revised: History In 1985, a group of British optometrists and dispensing opticians each took two century's out of their businesses to establish clinics in Tanzania, where they tested the eyes of local people and dispensed second-hand spectacles collected in UK.
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Original: History In 1985, a group of British optometrists and dispensing opticians each took two weeks out of their businesses to establish clinics in Tanzania, where they tested the eyes of local people and dispensed second-hand spectacles collected in UK.
Revised: History In 1985, a group of British optometrists and dispensing opticians each took two weeks out of their pants to establish clinics in Tanzania, where they tested the eyes of local people and dispensed second-hand spectacles collected in UK.
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Original: History In 1985, a group of British optometrists and dispensing opticians each took two weeks out of their businesses to establish clinics in Tanzania, where they tested the eyes of local people and dispensed second-hand spectacles collected in UK.
Revised: History In 1985, a group of British optometrists and dispensing opticians each took two weeks out of their businesses to establish clinics in Tanzania, where they tested the eyes of local people and dispensed second-foot spectacles collected in UK.
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Original:  Basically he was a Hindu  later converted - his early name of Maina].
Revised:  He was a Hindu later converted - his early name of Maina].
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Original:  Basically he was a Hindu  later converted - his early name of Maina].
Revised:  Basically he was a Hindu who later converted - his early name of Maina].
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Original:  In a musical conference in Banaras in 1938, he was betstowed with the title "Maharaj Kathak" by his gurus, in the presence of eminent singers and dancers.
Revised:  In a musical conference in Banaras in 1938, he was betstowed with the title "Maharaj Kathak" by his gurus, in the presence of singers and dancers.
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Original: 'Old Roads, New Highways : Fifty Years of Pakistan, Victoria Schofield, Oxford University Press, 1997, British Alternative Theatre Directory 1988, David McGillivray, Robert Conway, Conway McGillivray, 1988, ASIN B00PAC01MA Fasih Ur Rehman, a discipline of Ghulam Hussain, has been carrying on the legacyof the great Kathak maestro through sheer hard work, self-discipline and dedication for the last 25 years .
Revised: 'Old Roads, New Highways : Fifty Years of Pakistan, Victoria Schofield, Oxford University Press, 1997, British Alternative Theatre Directory 1988, David McGillivray, Robert Conway, Conway McGillivray, 1988, ASIN B00PAC01MA Fasih Ur Rehman, a discipline of Ghulam Hussain, has been carrying on his legacy .
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Original:  He was a Hindu who later converted - his early name of Maina .
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Original:  He was a Hindu who later converted - his early name of Maina .
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Original:  Category:1905 births Category:2001 deaths Category:Dance teachers Category:Dance in Pakistan Category:Artists from Kolkata Category:Muhajir people Category:People from Karachi Category:People from Lahore Category:Recipients of the Pride of Performance Category:Nigar Award winners Category:Pakistani male dancers Category:Converts to Islam from Hindui
Revised:  Category:1905 births Category:2001 deaths Category:Dance teachers Category:Dance in Pakistan Category:Artists from Kolkata Category:Muhajir people Category:People from Karachi Category:People from Lahore Category:Recipients of the Pride of Performance Category:Nigar Award winners Category:Pakistani male dance
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Original: The Cape Provincial Council was the legislature of the Cape Province of South Africa.
Revised: The Cape Provincial Council was the provincial council of the Cape Province of South Africa.
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Original: The Times, edition of 26 July 1910, confirms the setting of the election date Category: History of South Africa Category: Former provinces of South Afri
Revised: The Times, edition of 26 July 1910, confirms the setting of the election date Category: Former provinces of South Africa Category: Former provinces of South Afri
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Original: External links To learn more about the Self-Perceived Quality of Life Scale and Theory, go to: www.life-scale.
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Original: During the past several decades researchers investigated the concept of “the good life” based on three theoretical approaches: (a) focusing on quality of life (QOL) on a population and on individual levels by considering objective and/or subjective factors present or absent in people’s lives (Power, 2004;
Revised: During the past several decades researchers investigated the concept of “the good life” based on three theoretical approaches: Focusing on quality of life (QOL) on a population and on individual levels by considering objective and/or subjective factors present or absent in people’s lives (Power, 2004;
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Original:  World Health Organization Quality of Life%DIFDELCMD < [%%% WHOQOL Group, 1995World Health Organization Quality of Life (WHOQOL) Group (1995).
Revised:  World Health Organization Quality of Life%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Group, 1995World Health Organization Quality of Life (WHOQOL) Group (1995).
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Original:  (b) focusing on subjective well-being (SWB) by considering an individual ’ s level of overall happiness and life satisfaction (Corey, Keyes, Magyar-Moe, 2004;
Revised:  (b) focusing on subjective well-being (SWB) by considering an individual ' s level of overall happiness and life satisfaction (Corey, Keyes, Magyar-Moe, 2004;
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Original:  (b) focusing on subjective well-being (SWB) by considering an individual ’ s level of overall happiness and life satisfaction (Corey, Keyes, Magyar-Moe, 2004;
Revised:  (b) focusing on subjective well-being (SWB) by considering an individual ’ s level of overall happiness and life satisfaction Magyar-Moe, 2004;
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Original:  Diener, Suh, Lucas,%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Smith, 1999;Diener, E., Suh, E. M., Lucas, R. E., Smith, H. E. (1999).
Revised:  Diener, Suh, Lucas,%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Smith, H. E. (1999).
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Original:  Ware & Sherbourne, 1992).
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Original: [[File:Table2bspql.jpg| Table 2. Categories of Needs by Self-Concept, Cognitive Development, Moral Development, and Corresponding Anatomical Brain Regions]] Instinctual needs include (a) sensory stimulation needs that became linked with positive or negative affect without involvement of cognitive evaluations;
Revised: [[File:Table2bspql.jpg| Categories of Needs by Self-Concept, Cognitive Development, Moral Development, and Corresponding Anatomical Brain Regions]] Instinctual needs include (a) sensory stimulation needs that became linked with positive or negative affect without involvement of cognitive evaluations;
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Original: Figure 2. Lifespan curve sample As people approach a life stage in their development, they face developmental tasks that they need to master in order for the transition to the next life stage to be successful (Erikson, 1968;
Revised: Figure 2. Lifespan curve sample As people approach a life stage in their development, they face developmental tasks that they need to master in order for the transition to the next life stage to be successful .Erikson, 1968.
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Original:  Harter, 1998, 1999).
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Original:  The cycle of transition from one life stage to another is marked by three phases: (a) Mastering or failing a task;
Revised:  The cycle of transition from one life stage to another is marked by three phases: Mastering or failing a task;
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Original:  (b) consequential reevaluation of life circumstances, values, and self-concept;
Revised:  Consequential reevaluation of life circumstances, values, and self-concept;
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Original:  and (c) adjustment and adaptation to new values and circumstances.
Revised:  and Adjustment and adaptation to new values and circumstances.
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Original:  A curve of SWB throughout the lifespan can reflect the experience of an individual ’ s good life .
Revised:  A curve of SWB throughout the lifespan can reflect the experience of an individual ' s good life .
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Original: SPQL model center Theory It is safe to postulate that all people want to have a good life.
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Original:  SWBconsists of its baseline, which is the average of overall happiness/unhappiness , and transient deviations, which are measures of frequency and intensity of nonnormative transient experiences of happiness/unhappiness.
Revised:  SWBconsists of its baseline, which is the average of overall happiness/unhappiness and transient deviations, which are measures of frequency and intensity of nonnormative transient experiences of happiness/unhappiness.
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Original:  Subjective affective experiences (SAE) consist of the average of overall positive and negative affect.
Revised:  Subjective affective experiences (SAE) Average of overall positive and negative affect.
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Original:  Fulfillment of needs consists of a product of strength and fulfillment of a wide range of needs and preferences.
Revised:  Fulfillment of needs A product of strength and fulfillment of a wide range of needs and preferences.
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Original:  Because fluctuations within SPQL are likely to occur over time, a single-occasion measurement will not provide a comprehensive assessment (Diener, 2000;
Revised:  Because fluctuations within SPQL are likely to occur over time, a single-occasion measurement will not provide a comprehensive assessment .Diener, 2000.
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Original:  Lyubomirsky, Sheldon, & Schkade, 2005).
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Original:  SPQL axes Participants’ responses on the inventories for each of the three SPQL axes (see Appendixes) provided the data for the psychometric validation of the scale and for the quantitative analyses that allowed measuring the good life.
Revised:  Participants’ responses on the inventories for each of the three SPQL axes (see Appendixes) provided the data for the psychometric validation of the scale and for the quantitative analyses that allowed measuring the good life.
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Original:  SPQL axes Participants’ responses on the inventories for each of the three SPQL axes (see Appendixes) provided the data for the psychometric validation of the scale and for the quantitative analyses that allowed measuring the good life.
Revised:  SPQL axes Axes Participants' responses on the inventories for each of the three SPQL axes (see Appendixes) provided the data for the psychometric validation of the scale and for the quantitative analyses that allowed measuring the good life.
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Original:  Watson & Clark, 1994).
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Original:  Axis I: subjective well-being  (SWB) The SWB baseline is maintained by psychological and biological homeostasis ( Brickman & Campbell, 1971;
Revised:  Axis I: subjective well-being The subjective well-being (SWB) The SWB baseline is maintained by psychological and biological homeostasis ( Brickman & Campbell, 1971;
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Original:  Axis I: subjective well-being  (SWB) The SWB baseline is maintained by psychological and biological homeostasis ( Brickman & Campbell, 1971;
Revised:  Axis I: subjective well-being (SWB) baseline is maintained by psychological and biological homeostasis ( Brickman & Campbell, 1971;
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Original:  Axis I: subjective well-being  (SWB) The SWB baseline is maintained by psychological and biological homeostasis ( Brickman & Campbell, 1971;
Revised:  Axis I: subjective well-being (SWB) The SWB baseline is maintained by psychological and biological homeostasis . Brickman & Campbell, 1971;
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Original:  Axis I: subjective well-being  (SWB) The SWB baseline is maintained by psychological and biological homeostasis ( Brickman & Campbell, 1971;
Revised:  Axis I: subjective well-being (SWB) The SWB baseline is maintained by psychological and biological homeostasis ( Brickman & Campbell, 1971.
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Original:  Cummins & Lau, 2004).
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Original:  Axis II: subjective affective experiences (SAE) People who have experienced more positive and less negative subjective affective experiences (SAE) during their lives (i.e., transient deviations), have a higher SPQL.
Revised:  Axis II: subjective affective experiences People who have experienced more positive and less negative subjective affective experiences (SAE) during their lives (i.e., transient deviations), have a higher SPQL.
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Original:  However, felt needs are not the only kind of needs that a person may have (Maslow, 1970) .
Revised:  However, felt needs are not the only kind of needs that a person may have .
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Original:  In order to measure fulfillment of needs, a broad range of human needs was sorted into four conceptually distinct categories (see Table 2) that are (a) contingent on corresponding stages of cognitive and moral development ( Kohlberg, Levine, & Hewer, 1983;
Revised:  In order to measure fulfillment of needs, a broad range of human needs was sorted into four conceptually distinct categories that are (a) contingent on corresponding stages of cognitive and moral development ( Kohlberg, Levine, & Hewer, 1983;
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Original:  In order to measure fulfillment of needs, a broad range of human needs was sorted into four conceptually distinct categories (see Table 2) that are (a) contingent on corresponding stages of cognitive and moral development ( Kohlberg, Levine, & Hewer, 1983;
Revised:  In order to measure fulfillment of needs, a broad range of human needs was sorted into four conceptually distinct categories (see Table 2) that are (a) contingent on corresponding stages of cognitive and moral development , Kohlberg, Levine, & Hewer, 1983;
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Original:  Piaget, 1952), (b) constitute major components of self-concept (Marcia, 1980), and (c) correspond to the neural activity in different clusters of anatomical brain regions (Berridge, 2004;
Revised:  Piaget, 1952), (b) constitute major components of self-concept ,Marcia, 1980. and (c) correspond to the neural activity in different clusters of anatomical brain regions (Berridge, 2004;
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Original:  Piaget, 1952), (b) constitute major components of self-concept (Marcia, 1980), and (c) correspond to the neural activity in different clusters of anatomical brain regions (Berridge, 2004;
Revised:  Piaget, 1952), (b) constitute major components of self-concept (Marcia, 1980), and (c) correspond to the neural activity in different clusters of anatomical brain regions .Berridge, 2004.
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Original:  Lewis, 2000a ) . Because sometimes the same anatomical brain regions are involved in different ways in neural activity associated with the four categories of needs, implicated brain regions will be distinguished based on their dominance in related processes, and based on the chronological maturation of the dominant regions.
Revised:  Lewis, 2000a . Because sometimes the same anatomical brain regions are involved in different ways in neural activity associated with the four categories of needs, implicated brain regions will be distinguished based on their dominance in related processes, and based on the chronological maturation of the dominant regions.
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