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Original:  Both of these measure not only helped to reduce the amount of harmful emissions being produced by motor vehicles in the US but they also helped improve health measures, one example being that reducing the amount of lead in gasoline directly correlated with decreasing blood lead content from 1976 to 1980.
Revised:  Both of these measures not only helped to reduce the amount of harmful emissions being produced by motor vehicles in the US but they also helped improve health measures, one example being that reducing the amount of lead in gasoline directly correlated with decreasing blood lead content from 1976 to 1980.
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Original:  Lead is a soft metal that when introduced to the human body, can cause damage throughout many  systems including the nervous, cardiovascular, immune, and renal systems.
Revised:  Lead is a soft metal that when introduced to the human body, can cause damage throughout many body systems including the nervous, cardiovascular, immune, and renal systems.
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Original:  Carbon monoxide is introduced into the air through combustion reactions, and when inhaled, the carbon monoxide mimics oxygen  and binds to hemoglobin, not allowing for proper oxygenation, which can exacerbate preexisting condition such as asthma and COPD.
Revised:  Carbon monoxide is introduced into the air through combustion reactions, and when inhaled, the carbon monoxide mimics oxygen molecules and binds to hemoglobin, not allowing for proper oxygenation, which can exacerbate preexisting condition such as asthma and COPD.
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Original:  Carbon monoxide is introduced into the air through combustion reactions, and when inhaled, the carbon monoxide mimics oxygen  and binds to hemoglobin, not allowing for proper oxygenation, which can exacerbate preexisting condition such as asthma and COPD.
Revised:  Carbon monoxide is introduced into the air through combustion reactions, and when inhaled, the carbon monoxide mimics oxygen and binds to hemoglobin, not allowing for proper oxygenation, which can exacerbate pre-existing conditions such as asthma and COPD.
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Original:  This statistic illustrates that bikes are a very feasible  for a lot of journeys in the US.
Revised:  This statistic illustrates that bikes are a very feasible option for a lot of journeys in the US.
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Original: Transportation and health Background and Safety Measures Transportation is a core part of a functioning society, and managing the health impact of transportation falls under the branch of public health.
Revised:  Background and Safety Measures Transportation is a core part of a functioning society, and managing the health impact of transportation falls under the branch of public health.
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Original: Transportation and health Background and Safety Measures Transportation is a core part of a functioning society, and managing the health impact of transportation falls under the branch of public health.
Revised: Transportation and health Background and safety measures Transportation is a core part of a functioning society, and managing the health impact of transportation falls under the branch of public health.
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Original:  Air Quality and Emissions Production 564x564px|Comparison of Growth Areas and Emissions 1980-2015, US The six main pollutants monitored by the EPA that can have serious health consequences are particulate matter, ground-level ozone, lead, carbon monoxide, sulfur dioxide, and nitrogen dioxide.
Revised:  Air quality and emissions production 564x564px|Comparison of Growth Areas and Emissions 1980-2015, US The six main pollutants monitored by the EPA that can have serious health consequences are particulate matter, ground-level ozone, lead, carbon monoxide, sulfur dioxide, and nitrogen dioxide.
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Original:  Urban Centers and Public Transportation Public transportation is broad term encompassing a wide variety of methods of transportation including commuter rails, light rails, heavy rails, trolleys, and busses.
Revised:  Urban Public transportation is broad term encompassing a wide variety of methods of transportation including commuter rails, light rails, heavy rails, trolleys, and busses.
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Original:  Urban Centers and Public Transportation Public transportation is broad term encompassing a wide variety of methods of transportation including commuter rails, light rails, heavy rails, trolleys, and busses.
Revised:  Urban Centers and Public Transportation centers and public transportation Public transportation is broad term encompassing a wide variety of methods of transportation including commuter rails, light rails, heavy rails, trolleys, and busses.
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Original:  Public transit produces less emissions than cars which reduces levels in the air, decreasing risk for the harmful effects of emission 
Revised:  Public transit produces less emissions than cars which reduces levels in the air, decreasing risk for the harmful effects of emissions. 
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Original:  Accidents are the third leading cause of death in the United States, and one quarter of those are motor vehicle accidents, comprising of 40,327 deaths per year.
Revised:  Accidents are the third leading cause of death in the United States, and one quarter of those are motor vehicle accidents, accounting for 40,327 deaths per year.
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Original:  Particulate matter is comprised of a mix of solid and liquid matter such as dust, dirt, or smoke that makes up two categories, PM10 and PM2.5, the former being anything smaller than 10 micrometers and the latter being anything smaller than 2.5 micrometers.
Revised:  Particulate matter consists of a mix of solid and liquid matter such as dust, dirt, or smoke that makes up two categories, PM10 and PM2.5, the former being anything smaller than 10 micrometers and the latter being anything smaller than 2.5 micrometers.
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Original:  Many measures have been taking over the years to improve health outcomes related to transportation.
Revised:  Many measures have been taken over the years to improve health outcomes related to transportation.
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Original:  Both of these measures not only helped to reduce the amount of harmful emissions being produced by motor vehicles in the US  but they also helped improve health measures , one examplebeing that reducing the amount of lead in gasoline directly correlated with decreasing blood lead content from 1976 to 1980.
Revised:  Both of these measures not only helped to reduce the amount of harmful emissions being produced by motor vehicles in the US , but they also helped improve health measures , one examplebeing that reducing the amount of lead in gasoline directly correlated with decreasing blood lead content from 1976 to 1980.
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Original:  Both of these measures not only helped to reduce the amount of harmful emissions being produced by motor vehicles in the US  but they also helped improve health measures , one examplebeing that reducing the amount of lead in gasoline directly correlated with decreasing blood lead content from 1976 to 1980.
Revised:  Both of these measures not only helped to reduce the amount of harmful emissions being produced by motor vehicles in the US but they also helped improve health measures . For example, it was found that reducing the amount of lead in gasoline directly correlated with decreasing blood lead content from 1976 to 1980.
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Original: Air quality and emissions production 564x564px|Comparison of Growth Areas and Emissions 1980-2015, US The six main pollutants monitored by the EPA that can have serious health consequences are particulate matter, ground-level ozone, lead, carbon monoxide, sulfur dioxide , and nitrogen dioxide.
Revised: Air quality and emissions production 564x564px|Comparison of Growth Areas and Emissions 1980-2015, US The six main pollutants monitored by the EPA that can have serious health consequences are particulate matter, ground-level ozone, lead, carbon monoxide, sulfur dioxide and nitrogen dioxide.
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Original:  It functions by filtering exhaust from a combustion engine in a vehicle for potentially harmful gasses and catalyzes reactions to transform them into less harmful chemicals such as water, carbon dioxide, and nitrogen.
Revised:  It functions by filtering exhaust from a combustion engine in a vehicle for potentially harmful gases and catalyzes reactions to transform them into less harmful chemicals such as water, carbon dioxide, and nitrogen.
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Original:  Urban centers and public transportation Public transportation is broad term encompassing a wide variety of methods of transportation including commuter rails, light rails, heavy rails, trolleys, and busses .
Revised:  Urban centers and public transportation Public transportation is broad term encompassing a wide variety of methods of transportation including commuter rails, light rails, heavy rails, trolleys, and buses .
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Original: The Moyon Naga tribe are one of the Naga tribes that mostly resides in Manipur, India and some in Sagaing Region, Myanmar.
Revised: The Moyon Naga tribe are one of the Naga ethnic group that mostly resides in Manipur, India and some in Sagaing Region, Myanmar.
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Original: LGBT+ Advocacy Eldridge identifies as non-binary and is a strong advocate of LGBT+ inclusion.
Revised: LGBT+ Advocacy Eldridge is non-binary and is a strong advocate of LGBT+ inclusion.
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Original: Education and Research Eldridge obtained their MA and MSci from the University of Cambridge, England.
Revised: Education and research Eldridge obtained their MA and MSci from the University of Cambridge, England.
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Original:  LGBT+ Advocacy Eldridge is non-binary and is a strong advocate of LGBT+ inclusion.
Revised:  LGBT+ advocacy Eldridge is non-binary and is a strong advocate of LGBT+ inclusion.
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Original:  Three years after graduating from NYU, he enrolled at Brooklyn Law School, where he earned his Juris Doctor (J.D.) 
Revised:  Three years after graduating from NYU, he enrolled at Brooklyn Law School, where he earned his Juris Doctor (J.D.) .
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Original: Members of the Senate (Netherlands) Category:People from Batavia, Dutch East Indies Category:People from The Hague Category: Political analysts Category: Philosophers of law Category:State Secretaries for Justice of the Netherlands Category:University of Amsterdam faculty Category:Writers from The Hague Category:20th-century Dutch educators Category:20th-century Dutch lawyers Category:20th-century Dutch male writers Category:20th-century Dutch politicians Category:20th-century Dutch scientis
Revised: Members of the Senate (Netherlands) Category:People from Batavia, Dutch East Indies Category:People from The Hague Category: Philosophers of law Category:State Secretaries for Justice of the Netherlands Category:University of Amsterdam faculty Category:Writers from The Hague Category:20th-century Dutch educators Category:20th-century Dutch lawyers Category:20th-century Dutch male writers Category:20th-century Dutch politicians Category:20th-century Dutch scientis
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Original: Members of the Senate (Netherlands) Category:People from Batavia, Dutch East Indies Category:People from The Hague Category: Political analysts Category: Philosophers of law Category:State Secretaries for Justice of the Netherlands Category:University of Amsterdam faculty Category:Writers from The Hague Category:20th-century Dutch educators Category:20th-century Dutch lawyers Category:20th-century Dutch male writers Category:20th-century Dutch politicians Category:20th-century Dutch scientis
Revised: Members of the Senate (Netherlands) Category:People from Batavia, Dutch East Indies Category:People from The Hague Category: Political analysts Category: Philosophers of law Category:State Secretaries for Justice of the Netherlands Category:University of Amsterdam faculty Category:Writers from The Hague Category:20th-century Dutch educators Category:20th-century Dutch lawyers Category:20th-century Dutch male writers Category:20th-century Dutch politicia
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Original: Indo people Category:Jurisprudence academics Category:Members of the Senate (Netherlands) Category:People from Batavia, Dutch East Indies Category: People from The Hague Category:Philosophers of law Category:State Secretaries for Justice of the Netherlands Category:University of Amsterdam faculty Category:Writers from The Hague Category:20th-century Dutch educators Category:20th-century Dutch lawyers Category:20th-century Dutch male writers Category:20th-century Dutch politicia
Revised: Indo people Category:Jurisprudence academics Category:Members of the Senate (Netherlands) Category:People from Batavia, Dutch East Indies Category: Politicians from The Hague Category:Philosophers of law Category:State Secretaries for Justice of the Netherlands Category:University of Amsterdam faculty Category:Writers from The Hague Category:20th-century Dutch educators Category:20th-century Dutch lawyers Category:20th-century Dutch male writers Category:20th-century Dutch politicia
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Original: Biography Sen was  the nephew of the Maharani of Cooch Behar , Suniti Devi, and was from Calcutta .
Revised: Biography Sen was the Maharani of Cooch Behar , Suniti Devi, and was from Calcutta .
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Original:  On his second attempt in early 1917, having by now turned 18, Sen succeeded in obtaining a temporary honorary commission  as a second lieutenant in the RFC , with effect from 24 April 1917.
Revised:  On his second attempt in early 1917, having by now turned 18. This time he was successful, and he was awarded a temporary honorary commission as a second lieutenant in the RFC , with effect from 24 April 1917.
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Original:  On his second attempt in early 1917, having by now turned 18, Sen succeeded in obtaining a temporary honorary commission  as a second lieutenant in the RFC , with effect from 24 April 1917.
Revised:  On his second attempt in early 1917, having by now turned 18, Sen succeeded in obtaining a temporary honorary commission in the RFC as a second lieutenant in the RFC , with effect from 24 April 1917.
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Original:  On his second attempt in early 1917, having by now turned 18, Sen succeeded in obtaining a temporary honorary commission  as a second lieutenant in the RFC , with effect from 24 April 1917.
Revised:  On his second attempt in early 1917, having by now turned 18, Sen succeeded in obtaining a temporary honorary commission as a second lieutenant , with effect from 24 April 1917.
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Original:  He was requested to report to the No. 1 School of Military Aeronautics at Reading from the same date.
Revised:  He was ordered to report to the No. 1 School of Military Aeronautics at Reading from the same date.
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Original:  He subsequently returned to India and joined the Indian Imperial Police as an assistant superintendent (junior scale, on probation) with effect from 20 September 1921.
Revised:  He returned to India and joined the Indian Imperial Police as an assistant superintendent (junior scale, on probation) with effect from 20 September 1921.
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Original:  Nothing appears to be known about his subsequent life, apart from his apparent disappearance in December 1941.
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Original:  He applied for a commission in the RFC in November 1916, but his application was rejected as he was underage.
Revised:  First World War Sen applied for a commission in the RFC in November 1916, but his application was rejected as he was underage.
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Original:  Resolution adopted by the 80th General Assembly, September 25, 201 
Revised:  Resolution adopted by the 80th General Assembly, September 25, 201 Referenc
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Original:  Based on this understanding, our management system is a top-down commitment that begins with the character of the individual dental practitioner striving for continuous growth within his or her practice.
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Original:  The Ford F-150  has been the best selling vehicle in the United States for some time]] Social comparison barriers include the comparison of actions with those of others to determine the “correct” behaviour, whether it be beneficial or harmful for the environment.
Revised:  The Ford F-150 truck has been the best selling vehicle in the United States for some time]] Social comparison barriers include the comparison of actions with those of others to determine the “correct” behaviour, whether it be beneficial or harmful for the environment.
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Original: Several Chinese classics pair the legendary Suihouzhu ("the Marquis of Sui's pearl") with another priceless gem, the Heshibi (和氏璧, "Mr. He's jade-disk ").
Revised: Several Chinese classics pair the legendary Suihouzhu ("the Marquis of Sui's pearl") with another priceless gem, the Heshibi (和氏璧, "Mr. He's jade ").
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Original:  Both diamonds and white topaz may phosphoresce if heated below red heat.
Revised:  Both diamonds and white Topaz may phosphoresce if heated below red heat.
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Original:  The luminescent Bologna Stone (impure barite), which was discovered by Vincenzo Cascariolo in 1602, was sometimes called "" ("lunar stone"), because, like the moon, it gave out in the darkness the light it received from the sun (Kunz 1913: 168).
Revised:  The luminescent Bologna Stone (impure barite), which was discovered by Vincenzo Cascariolo in 1602, was sometimes called "" ("lunar stone"), because, like the moon, it gave out in the darkness the light is received from the sun (Kunz 1913: 168).
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Original:  However, the English naturalist Philip Skippon (1641–1691) stated that one Monsieur Lort, of Montpellier, France, a "counterfeiter" of "amethysts, topazes, emeralds, and sapphires" found that on heating "fluor smaragdi" (Latin for "flowing emerald/beryl/jasper") in a pan of coals and afterwards "putting it in a dark place (it) shines very much: At the same time several other stones were tried but did not shine." (1732 6: 718).
Revised:  However, the English naturalist Philip Skippon (1641–1691) stated that one Monsieur Lort, of Montpellier, France, a "counterfeiter" of "amethysts, topazes, emeralds, and sapphires" found that on heating "fluor smaragdi" (Latin for "flowing emerald/beryl/jasper") in a pan of coals and afterward "putting it in a dark place (it) shines very much: At the same time several other stones were tried but did not shine." (1732 6: 718).
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Original:  For luminous gem myths, Ball concludes that while it is "not impossible that the inventors of certain of the [luminous gem] tales may have been acquainted with the luminosity of gems, in my opinion  many of the tales must be of other origin" (1938: 497).
Revised:  For luminous gem myths, Ball concludes that while it is "not impossible that the inventors of certain of the [luminous gem] tales may have been acquainted with the luminosity of gems, in my opinion , many of the tales must be of other origin" (1938: 497).
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Original:  For luminous gem myths, Ball concludes that while it is "not impossible that the inventors of certain of the [luminous gem] tales may have been acquainted with the luminosity of gems, in my opinion  many of the tales must be of other origin" (1938: 497).
Revised:  For luminous gem myths, Ball concludes that while it is "not impossible that the inventors of certain of the [luminous gem] tales may have been acquainted with the luminosity of gems, in my opinion many of the tales must be of another origin" (1938: 497).
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Original:  The American sinologist Edward H. Schafer proposes that the phosphorescent "emeralds" of classical antiquity, such as the brilliantly shining green eyes of the marble lion on the tomb of King Hermias of Atarneus (d. 341 BCE) on Cyprus, were fluorite, even though the Hellenistic alchemists had methods, "seemingly magical, of making night-shining gems by the application of phosphorescent paints to stones ", the most famous being their "emeralds" and "carbuncles." (1963: 238).
Revised:  The American sinologist Edward H. Schafer proposes that the phosphorescent "emeralds" of classical antiquity, such as the brilliantly shining green eyes of the marble lion on the tomb of King Hermias of Atarneus (d. 341 BCE) on Cyprus, were fluorite, even though the Hellenistic alchemists had methods, "seemingly magical, of making night-shining gems by the application of phosphorescent paints tostones ", the most famous being their "emeralds" and "carbuncles." (1963: 238).
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Original:  "fire-eyed")" as: "In early use applied vaguely to a red or fiery gem, as ruby or carbuncle;
Revised:  "fire-eyed")" as: "In early use applied vaguely to a red or fiery gem, like ruby or carbuncle;
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Original:  and carbuncle or carbuncle-stone (from Latin " carbunculus ," "small glowing ember") as: "A name variously applied to precious stones of a red or fiery colour ;
Revised:  and carbuncle or carbuncle-stone (from Latin " carbunculus ," "small glowing ember") as: "A name variously applied to precious stones of red or fiery colour ;
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Original:  and carbuncle or carbuncle-stone (from Latin " carbunculus ," "small glowing ember") as: "A name variously applied to precious stones of a red or fiery colour ;
Revised:  and carbuncle or carbuncle-stone (from Latin " carbunculus ," "small glowing ember") as: "A name variously applied to precious stones of a red or fiery color ;
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Original:  in the Middle Ages and later, besides being a name for the ruby, the term was esp. applied to a mythical gem said to emit a light in the dark." (Ball 1938: 498).
Revised:  in the Middle Ages and later, besides being a name for the ruby, the term was esp. applied to a mythical gem said to emit light in the dark." (Ball 1938: 498).
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Original:  There is an old rabbinical tradition that "Noah had a luminous stone in the Ark that "shone more brightly by night than by day, thus serving to distinguish day and night when the sun and moon were shrouded by dense clouds." (Harvey 1957: 15  ).
Revised:  Rabbinic Judaism had a tradition that "Noah had a luminous stone in the Ark that "shone more brightly by night than by day, thus serving to distinguish day and night when the sun and moon were shrouded by dense clouds." (Harvey 1957: 15 ).
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