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Original:  Halper and Booth are both belong to an activist group of international participants who were attempting to challenge the blockade and enter Israel  and police say their defiance "constitutes the legitimization of a terrorist organization."
Revised:  Halper and Booth are both belong to an activist group of international participants who were attempting to challenge the blockade and enter Israel , and police say their defiance "constitutes the legitimization of a terrorist organization."
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Original:  " Halper currently resides in Jerusalem
Revised:  Halper currently resides in Jerusalem
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Original:  " Halper currently resides in Jerusalem
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Original:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 when Hamas won elections and took control of the Gaza Strip . Halper and Booth both belong to an activist group of international participants who were attempting to challenge the blockade and enter Israel, and police say their defiance "constitutes the legitimization of a terrorist organization.  
Revised:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 when Hamas won elections and took control of the Gaza Strip . Halper and Booth both belong to an activist group of international participants who were attempting to challenge the blockade and enter Israel, and police say their defiance "constitutes the legitimization of a terrorist organization. " 
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Original:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 by the international community on Hamas after they won elections and refused to recognize Israel and respect agreements previously signed .
Revised:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 when Hamas won elections and refused to recognize Israel and respect agreements previously signed .
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Original:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 by the international community on Hamas after they won elections and refused to recognize Israel and respect agreements previously signed .
Revised:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 by the international community on Hamas after they won elections and took control of the Gaza Strip .
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Original:  The evidence involving the alleged threats does not warrant federal charges now," added Eid.
Revised:  The evidence involving the alleged threats does not warrant federal charges now," said Eid.
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Original: The three men are identified as Tharin Gartrell, 28, Nathan Johnson, 32  and Shawn Robert Adolf, 33. Gartrell was the first suspect arrested.
Revised: The three men are identified as Tharin Gartrell, 28, Nathan Johnson, 32 , and Shawn Robert Adolf, 33. Gartrell was the first suspect arrested.
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Original:  Johnson was arrested a shot time later and Adolf was arrested trying to escape from police by jumping out of a hotel window on the sixth floor.
Revised:  Johnson was arrested a short time later and Adolf was arrested trying to escape from police by jumping out of a hotel window on the sixth floor.
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Original: Denver's CBS affiliate reports that "at least four people are under arrest in connection with a possible plot to kill Barack Obama" and one of the suspects reportedly told authorities that they were "going to shoot Obama from a high vantage point using a ... rifle …
Revised: Denver's CBS affiliate reported that "at least four people are under arrest in connection with a possible plot to kill Barack Obama" and one of the suspects reportedly told authorities that they were "going to shoot Obama from a high vantage point using a ... rifle …
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Original: St Stanislaus College is at the centre of a child-sex abuse investigation 300px Police have broadened investigations into Australia's oldest catholic boarding school - St Stanislaus College following claims that at least 13 men were sexually abused at the school in the 1970s and 1980s.
Revised:  Police have broadened investigations into Australia's oldest catholic boarding school - St Stanislaus College following claims that at least 13 men were sexually abused at the school in the 1970s and 1980s.
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Original: St Stanislaus College is at the centre of a child-sex abuse investigation 300px Police have broadened investigations into Australia's oldest catholic boarding school - St Stanislaus College following claims that at least 13 men were sexually abused at the school in the 1970s and 1980s.
Revised: St Stanislaus College is at the centre of a child-sex abuse investigation 300px Police have broadened investigations into Australia's oldest Catholic boarding school - St Stanislaus College following claims that at least 13 men were sexually abused at the school in the 1970s and 1980s.
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Original: Police have broadened investigations into Australia's oldest Catholic boarding school - St Stanislaus College  following claims that at least 13 men were sexually abused at the school in the 1970s and 1980s.
Revised: Police have broadened investigations into Australia's oldest Catholic boarding school , St Stanislaus College following claims that at least 13 men were sexually abused at the school in the 1970s and 1980s.
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Original: Police have broadened investigations into Australia's oldest Catholic boarding school - St Stanislaus College  following claims that at least 13 men were sexually abused at the school in the 1970s and 1980s.
Revised: Police have broadened investigations into Australia's oldest Catholic boarding school - St Stanislaus College , following claims that at least 13 men were sexually abused at the school in the 1970s and 1980s.
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Original:  St Stanislaus College is at the centre of a child-sex abuse investigation "All I can say is that NSW police force will be providing every form of support we possibly can to make the process for them as trouble-free as possible."
Revised:  "All I can say is that NSW police force will be providing every form of support we possibly can to make the process for them as trouble-free as possible."
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Original:  Supt Goodwin reassured the community that the allegations date back two decades and there is "absolutely no suggestion whatsoever that the college involved is/has been looking to anything in the current day , " "The college involved has been cooperating with the police completely with this inquiry .
Revised:  Supt Goodwin reassured the community that the allegations date back two decades and there is "absolutely no suggestion whatsoever that the college involved is/has been looking to anything in the current day . " "The college involved has been cooperating with the police completely with this inquiry .
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Original:  Supt Goodwin reassured the community that the allegations date back two decades and there is "absolutely no suggestion whatsoever that the college involved is/has been looking to anything in the current day , " "The college involved has been cooperating with the police completely with this inquiry .
Revised:  Supt Goodwin reassured the community that the allegations date back two decades and there is "absolutely no suggestion whatsoever that the college involved is/has been looking to anything in the current day , " "The college involved has been cooperating with the police completely with this inquiry ,
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Original:  "  Police would not release how many suspects were being investigated but said their inquiries had not let them to any other locations where former staff may have been employed.
Revised:  " The police would not release how many suspects were being investigated but said their inquiries had not let them to any other locations where former staff may have been employed.
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Original:  Supt Goodwin said Police were exploring all lines of enquiry and that "no loose ends (are) being let go at this stage."
Revised:  Superintendent Goodwin said Police were exploring all lines of enquiry and that "no loose ends (are) being let go at this stage."
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Original:  Supt Goodwin said Police were exploring all lines of enquiry and that "no loose ends (are) being let go at this stage."
Revised:  Supt Goodwin said Police were exploring all lines of enquiry and that "no loose ends are being let go at this stage."
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Original:  The school's principal, John Edwards said Police had served him with a search warrant last month which listed the names of three former staff members.
Revised:  The school's principal, John Edwards said the police had served him with a search warrant last month which listed the names of three former staff members.
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Original:  St Stanislaus College is at the centre of a child-sex abuse investigation  Superintendent Goodwin reassured the community that the allegations date back two decades and there is "absolutely no suggestion whatsoever that the college involved is/has been looking to anything in the current day."
Revised:  St Stanislaus College is at the centre of an on-going child-sex abuse investigation Superintendent Goodwin reassured the community that the allegations date back two decades and there is "absolutely no suggestion whatsoever that the college involved is/has been looking to anything in the current day."
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Original:  St Stanislaus College is at the centre of a child-sex abuse investigation  Superintendent Goodwin reassured the community that the allegations date back two decades and there is "absolutely no suggestion whatsoever that the college involved is/has been looking to anything in the current day."
Revised:  St Stanislaus College is at the centre of a child-sex abuse investigation . Superintendent Goodwin reassured the community that the allegations date back two decades and there is "absolutely no suggestion whatsoever that the college involved is/has been looking to anything in the current day."
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Original: The police would not release how many suspects were being investigated but said their inquiries had not let them to any other locations where former staff may have been employed.
Revised: The police would not release how many suspects were being investigated but said their inquiries had not led them to any other locations where former staff may have been employed.
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Original:   Wikinews has obtained a police statement from an alleged child-sex assualt victim made in 1997 against Priest Brian Joseph Spillane , the priest at the centre of a child-sex scandal at St Stanislaus College in Bathurst, New South Wales, Australia.
Revised:  Wikinews has obtained a police statement from an alleged victim made in 1997 against Priest Brian Joseph Spillane , the priest at the centre of a child-sex scandal at St Stanislaus College in Bathurst, New South Wales, Australia.
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Original:   Wikinews has obtained a police statement from an alleged child-sex assualt victim made in 1997 against Priest Brian Joseph Spillane , the priest at the centre of a child-sex scandal at St Stanislaus College in Bathurst, New South Wales, Australia.
Revised:  Wikinews has obtained a police statement from an alleged child-sex assualt victim made in 1997 against priest Brian Joseph Spillane , the priest at the centre of a child-sex scandal at St Stanislaus College in Bathurst, New South Wales, Australia.
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Original:   Wikinews has obtained a police statement from an alleged child-sex assualt victim made in 1997 against Priest Brian Joseph Spillane , the priest at the centre of a child-sex scandal at St Stanislaus College in Bathurst, New South Wales, Australia.
Revised:  Wikinews has obtained a police statement from an alleged child-sex assualt victim made in 1997 against Priest Brian Joseph Spillane 
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Original:  Related Stories Category:Australia category:Oceania Category:  Crime and law Category: Religion Category:Educati
Revised:  Related Stories category:Oceania Category: Crime and law Category: Religion Category:Educati
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Original:  Related Stories Category:Australia category:Oceania Category:  Crime and law Category: Religion Category:Educati
Revised:  Related Stories Category:Australia category:Oceania Category: Australia Category: Crime and law Category: Religion Category:Educati
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Original:  Related Stories Category:Australia category:Oceania Category:  Crime and law Category: Religion Category:Educati
Revised:  Related Stories Category:Australia category:Oceania Category: Crime and law Category: Education Category:Religi
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Original: Former American NBA basketball star Kevin Duckworth has died age 44.
Revised: Former American NBA basketball star Kevin Duckworth has died aged 44.
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Original:  The former Trail Blazer died on Monday off an apparent heart attack in his hotel room at Gleneden Beach, Oregon.
Revised:  The former Trail Blazer died on Monday of an apparent heart attack in his hotel room at Gleneden Beach, Oregon.
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Original:  He was in town for part of a free kids basketball clinic being run by the Trail Blazers.
Revised:  He was in town for part of a free childrens basketball clinic being run by the Trail Blazers.
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Original:  Duckworth started out his career with the San Antonio Spurs when he was selected in the second round of the 1986 NBA Draft.
Revised:  Duckworth commenced his career with the San Antonio Spurs when he was selected in the second round of the 1986 NBA Draft.
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Original:  This performence won him the NBA Most Improved Player Award.
Revised:  This performance won him the NBA Most Improved Player Award.
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Original: Former American NBA basketball star Kevin Duckworth has died aged 44.
Revised: Former American National Basketball Association (NBA) basketball star Kevin Duckworth has died aged 44.
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Original: Former American NBA basketball star Kevin Duckworth has died aged 44.
Revised: Former American NBA basketball star Kevin Duckworth has died at age 44.
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Original:  It was during his time with the Portland Trail Blazers that he had his most sucessful season.
Revised:  It was during his time with the Trail Blazers that he had his most sucessful season.
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Original:  During 1988 he shot 77.0  from the free throw lines and played well all round .
Revised:  During 1988 he shot 77.0 from the free throw line and played well all round .
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Original:  During 1988 he shot 77.0  from the free throw lines and played well all round .
Revised:  During 1988 he shot 77.0 from the free throw lines and played well all-round .
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Original:  This performance won him the NBA Most Improved Player Award.
Revised:  This performance earned him the NBA Most Improved Player Award.
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Original:  The following year he was selected as an All-star .
Revised:  The following year he was selected as an All-Star .
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Original:  They made it to the 1990 NBA Finals and in 1991 he was selected as an All-star for a second time.
Revised:  They made it to the 1990 NBA Finals and in 1991 he was selected as an All-Star for a second time.
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Original:   " R enowned neurosurgeon" Dr. Joseph Maroon performed the operation on Cena, after he sustained injuries during the SummerSlam® Pay-Per-View match, . He suffered a herniated disc in his neck, in a lost match again a wrestler named Batista.
Revised:  " enowned neurosurgeon" Dr. Joseph Maroon performed the operation on Cena, after he sustained injuries during the SummerSlam® Pay-Per-View match, . He suffered a herniated disc in his neck, in a lost match again a wrestler named Batista.
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Original:   " R enowned neurosurgeon" Dr. Joseph Maroon performed the operation on Cena, after he sustained injuries during the SummerSlam® Pay-Per-View match, . He suffered a herniated disc in his neck, in a lost match again a wrestler named Batista.
Revised:  " R renowned neurosurgeon" Dr. Joseph Maroon performed the operation on Cena, after he sustained injuries during the SummerSlam® Pay-Per-View match, . He suffered a herniated disc in his neck, in a lost match again a wrestler named Batista.
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Original:  He suffered a herniated disc in his neck, in a lost match again a wrestler named Batista.
Revised:  He suffered a herniated disc in his neck, in a lost match against a wrestler named Batista.
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Original: In his WWE career, Cena has been a three time WWE Champion, a three time United States Champion, and a two time World Tag Team Champion.
Revised: In his WWE career, Cena is a three-time WWE Champion, a three time United States Champion, and a two time World Tag Team Champion.
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Original: In his WWE career, Cena has been a three time WWE Champion, a three time United States Champion, and a two time World Tag Team Champion.
Revised: In his WWE career, Cena has been a three time WWE Champion, a three-time United States Champion, and a two time World Tag Team Champion.
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Original: In his WWE career, Cena has been a three time WWE Champion, a three time United States Champion, and a two time World Tag Team Champion.
Revised: In his WWE career, Cena has been a three time WWE Champion, a three time United States Champion, and a two-time World Tag Team Champion.
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Original:  Nunavutospongia irregulara is the name of the new species of sponge found, released by Proceedings B the Royal Society's biological research journal.
Revised:  Nunavutospongia Irregulara is the name of the new species of sponge found, released by Proceedings B the Royal Society's biological research journal.
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Original:  Thick bones and armour-like scales have been found which are believed to belong to a new species of fish which grew up to two meters long.
Revised:  Thick bones and armour-like scales have been found that are believed to belong to a new species of fish which grew up to two meters long.
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Original:  Thousands of fossilized feces - termed coprolites -  small and as large as an arm have been found.
Revised:  Thousands of fossilized feces - termed coprolites - both small and as large as an arm have been found.
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Original:  Beechey Island , is connected to Devon Island during times of low tide.
Revised:  Beechy Island is connected to Devon Island during times of low tide.
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Original:  There are two areas on Devon Island about 30 kilometers apart providing Cretaceous fossil finds . Each area being analyzed are a few kilometers in length.
Revised:  Two areas on Devon Island about 30 kilometers apart providing Cretaceous fossil finds . Each area being analyzed are a few kilometers in length.
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Original:  There are two areas on Devon Island about 30 kilometers apart providing Cretaceous fossil finds . Each area being analyzed are a few kilometers in length.
Revised:  There are two areas on Devon Island about 30 kilometres apart are providing Cretaceous fossil finds . Each area being analyzed are a few kilometers in length.
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Original:  There are two areas on Devon Island about 30 kilometers apart providing Cretaceous fossil finds . Each area being analyzed are a few kilometers in length.
Revised:  There are two areas on Devon Island about 30 kilometers apart providing Cretaceous fossil finds , and each is kilometres in length.
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Original:  These areas are a khaki-colored valley greensands rich in fossil beds  which provide a peek at life 73 million years ago.
Revised:  These areas are khaki-coloured valley greensands rich in fossil beds which provide a peek at life 73 million years ago.
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Original:  These areas are a khaki-colored valley greensands rich in fossil beds  which provide a peek at life 73 million years ago.
Revised:  These areas are a khaki-colored valley greensands rich in fossil beds , which provide a peek at life 73 million years ago.
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Original:  During the Cretaceous era , the climate was warmer, large trees grew north of Baffin Island, and plesiosaurs, ichthyodectid fishes, sharks and roamed the waters of the arctic.
Revised:  During the Cretaceous era the climate was warmer, large trees grew north of Baffin Island, and plesiosaurs, ichthyodectid fishes, sharks and roamed the waters of the arctic.
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Original:  During the Cretaceous era , the climate was warmer, large trees grew north of Baffin Island, and plesiosaurs, ichthyodectid fishes, sharks and roamed the waters of the arctic.
Revised:  During the Cretaceous era , the climate was warmer, large trees grew north of Baffin Island, and plesiosaurs, ichthyodectid fish, and sharks roamed the waters of the arctic.
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Original:  Devon Island was submerged under warm water in the Cretaceous period, and before continental drifting the island was situated hundreds of kilometers south of its current location.
Revised:  Devon Island was submerged under warm water in the Cretaceous period, and before continental drifting the island was situated hundreds of kilometres south of its current location.
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Original:  The Royal Society is an eight member team consisting of Canadian, United States and Polish researchers.
Revised:  The eight-member team from the Royal Society consists of Canadian, United States and Polish researchers.
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Original:  In the same newsletter, principal John Edwards informs the school community that The Daily Telegraph had contacted him regarding sex abuse allegations     
Revised:  In the same newsletter, principal John Edwards informs the school community that The Daily Telegraph had contacted him regarding sex abuse allegations . 
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Original:  He said after feedback from the comments, the version was replaced on the schools website  
Revised:  He said after feedback from the comments, the version was replaced on the schools website . 
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Original:  Source: St Stanislaus College lefy|200px| Modified version of the controversial newsletter.
Revised:  Source: St Stanislaus College Modified version of the controversial newsletter.
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Original: The school at the centre of Child-Sex allegations, St Stanislaus College  has removed a newsletter recommending Penthouse magazine as recommended reading for teenage boys.
Revised: The school at the center of child-sex allegations, St Stanislaus College has removed a newsletter recommending Penthouse magazine as recommended reading for teenage boys.
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Original:  On the schools website, the newsletter has been replaced by a copy which ommits these comments.
Revised:  On the schools website, the newsletter has been replaced by a copy which omits these comments.
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Original:  The schools principal John Edwards told Wikinews that the newsletter was changed after Mr  MacDougall's answer was "widely interpreted to mean a girl magazine".
Revised:  The schools principal John Edwards told Wikinews that the newsletter was changed after Mr . MacDougall's answer was "widely interpreted to mean a girl magazine".
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Original:  When questioned by Wikinews on whether or not the article was recommending Penthouse, he said that the quesion was completed before the staff member went on long-service leave.
Revised:  When questioned by Wikinews on whether or not the article was recommending Penthouse, he said that the question was completed before the staff member went on long-service leave.
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