wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Using the usage data of a newly published paper, we conduct regression analysis to predict the future expected total usage count of the paper .
Revised:  Using the usage data of a newly published paper, regression analysis could predict the future expected total usage count of the paper .
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Original:  Using the usage data of a newly published paper, we conduct regression analysis to predict the future expected total usage count of the paper .
Revised:  Using the usage data of a newly published paper, we conduct regression analysis to predict the future expected total usage counts .
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Original:  Its scalability on multicore chips is often limited due to its low computational intensity, leading to interesting characteristics regarding optimal performance and energy to solution on the chip and highly parallel levels.
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Original:  In this paper we perform a thorough analysis of a two-relaxation-time (TRT) model in a sparse lattice representation on the Intel Sandy Bridge processor.
Revised:  In this paper we perform a thorough analysis of a sparse-lattice LBM implementation on the Intel Sandy Bridge processor.
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Original:  We then show if and how these findings may be extrapolated to the massively parallel level on a petascale-class machine, and quantify the energy-saving potential of various optimizations  .
Revised:  We then show how these findings may be extrapolated to the massively parallel level on a petascale-class machine, and quantify the energy-saving potential of various optimizations .
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Original: Algorithms with low computational intensity show interesting performance and power consumption behavior on multicore processors.
Revised: Memory-bound algorithms show complex performance and energy consumption behavior on multicore processors.
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Original:  We find that high single-core performance and a correct choice of the number of cores used on the chip are the essential factors for lowest energy to solution with minimal loss of performance .
Revised:  We find that high single-core performance and a correct choice of the number of active cores per chip are the essential factors for lowest energy to solution with minimal loss of performance .
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Original:  We find that high single-core performance and a correct choice of the number of cores used on the chip are the essential factors for lowest energy to solution with minimal loss of performance .
Revised:  We find that high single-core performance and a correct choice of the number of cores used on the chip are the essential optimizations for lowest energy to solution with minimal loss of performance .
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Original:  In the highly parallel case, these guidelines are found to be even more important for fixing the optimal performance-energy operating point , especially when taking the system's baseline power consumption and the MPI communication characteristics into account.
Revised:  In the highly parallel case, these guidelines are found to be even more important , especially when taking the system's baseline power consumption and the MPI communication characteristics into account.
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Original:  This faster-X effect can arise either as a consequence of hemizygosity  which leads to more efficient selection for recessive beneficial mutations in the heterogametic sex, or as a consequence of reduced effective population size on the hemizygous chromosome, which leads to increased fixation of weakly deleterious mutations due to random genetic drift.
Revised:  This faster-X effect can arise either as a consequence of hemizygosity , which leads to more efficient selection for recessive beneficial mutations in the heterogametic sex, or as a consequence of reduced effective population size on the hemizygous chromosome, which leads to increased fixation of weakly deleterious mutations due to random genetic drift.
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Original:  This faster-X effect can arise either as a consequence of hemizygosity  which leads to more efficient selection for recessive beneficial mutations in the heterogametic sex, or as a consequence of reduced effective population size on the hemizygous chromosome, which leads to increased fixation of weakly deleterious mutations due to random genetic drift.
Revised:  This faster-X effect can arise either as a consequence of hemizygosity which leads to more efficient selection for recessive beneficial mutations in the heterogametic sex, or as a consequence of reduced effective population size of the hemizygous chromosome, which leads to increased fixation of weakly deleterious mutations due to random genetic drift.
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Original:  Empirical results to date have suggested that, while the overall pattern across taxa is complicated, in general systems with male-heterogamy show a faster-X effect primarily attributable to more efficient selection , whereas systems with female-heterogamy show a faster-Z effect primarily attributable to increased drift .
Revised:  Empirical results to date have suggested that, while the overall pattern across taxa is complicated, in general systems with male-heterogamy show a faster-X effect primarily attributable to more efficient selection while the only female-heterogamy show a faster-Z effect primarily attributable to increased drift .
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Original: It is well known that, using fast algorithms for polynomial multiplication and division, evaluation of a polynomial F \in %DIFDELCMD < \CC[x] %%%  of degree n at n complex-valued points can be done with %DIFDELCMD < \softOh%%% (n) exact field operations in %DIFDELCMD < \CC%%% , where%DIFDELCMD < \softOh%%%  (\cdot) means that we omit polylogarithmic factors.
Revised: It is well known that, using fast algorithms for polynomial multiplication and division, evaluation of a polynomial F \in %DIFDELCMD < \CC[x] %%% of degree n at n complex-valued points can be done with %DIFDELCMD < \softOh%%% (n) exact field operations in %DIFDELCMD < \CC%%% %DIFDELCMD < \softOh%%% (\cdot) means that we omit polylogarithmic factors.
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Original:  We complement this result by an analysis of \emph{approximate multipoint evaluation of F to a precision of L bits after the binary point and prove a bit complexity of %DIFDELCMD < \softOh %%% (n(L + \tau + n\Gamma)), where 2^\tau and %DIFDELCMD < 2^{\Gamma}%%%  , with \tau, \Gamma \in %DIFDELCMD < \NN%%%  _{\ge 1}, are bounds on the magnitude of the coefficients of F and the evaluation points, respectively.
Revised:  We complement this result by an analysis of \emph{approximate multipoint evaluation of F to a precision of L bits after the binary point and prove a bit complexity of %DIFDELCMD < \softOh %%% (n(L + \tau + n\Gamma)), where 2^\tau and %DIFDELCMD < 2^{\Gamma}%%% , with \tau, \Gamma \in %DIFDELCMD < \NN%%% _{\ge 1}, are bounds on the magnitude of the coefficients of F and the evaluation points, respectively.
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Original:  In particular, in the important case where the precision demand dominates the other input parameters, the complexity is soft-linear in n and L. Our result on approximate multipoint evaluation has some interesting consequences on the bit complexity of three further approximation algorithms which all use polynomial evaluation as a key subroutine.
Revised:  In particular, in the important case where the precision demand dominates the other input parameters, the complexity is soft-linear in n and L. Our result on approximate multipoint evaluation has some interesting consequences on the bit complexity of further approximation algorithms which all use polynomial evaluation as a key subroutine.
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Original:  This comprises an algorithm to approximate the real roots of a polynomial, an algorithm for polynomial interpolation , and a method for computing a Taylor shift of a polynomial.
Revised:  Of these applications, we discuss in detail an algorithm for polynomial interpolation , and a method for computing a Taylor shift of a polynomial.
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Original:  This comprises an algorithm to approximate the real roots of a polynomial, an algorithm for polynomial interpolation , and a method for computing a Taylor shift of a polynomial.
Revised:  This comprises an algorithm to approximate the real roots of a polynomial, an algorithm for polynomial interpolation and for computing a Taylor shift of a polynomial.
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Original:   For all of the latter algorithms, we derive near optimal running times.
Revised:  For all of the latter algorithms, we derive near-optimal running times.
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Original: The global dynamics of gene regulatory networks are known to show robustness to perturbations of different kinds: intrinsic and extrinsic noise, as well as mutations of individual genes.
Revised: The global dynamics of gene regulatory networks are known to show robustness to perturbations in the form of intrinsic and extrinsic noise, as well as mutations of individual genes.
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Original:  We also propose a method to locally estimate the delay with which the video chunks are delivered , such that each user can decide its pre-buffering time at the beginning of a streaming session or re-buffering time in the case of a 'stall' event (empty playback buffer) during a streaming session .
Revised:  We also propose a method to locally estimate the delay with which the video chunks are delivered , such that each user can calculate its pre-buffering time at the beginning of a streaming session or re-buffering time in the case of a 'stall' event (empty playback buffer) during a streaming session .
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Original:  We also propose a method to locally estimate the delay with which the video chunks are delivered , such that each user can decide its pre-buffering time at the beginning of a streaming session or re-buffering time in the case of a 'stall' event (empty playback buffer) during a streaming session .
Revised:  We also propose a method to locally estimate the delay with which the video chunks are delivered , such that each user can decide its pre-buffering and re-buffering time in the case of a 'stall' event (empty playback buffer) during a streaming session .
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Original: Identification of all species in a microbial sample is an important and challenging task with crucial applications.
Revised: Identification of every single genome present in a microbial sample is an important and challenging task with crucial applications.
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Original:  However, there is hope for breaking this barrier as the number of different species is usually much smaller than the number of cells.
Revised:  However, there is hope for breaking this barrier as the number of different cell types with distinct genome sequences is usually much smaller than the number of cells.
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Original:  Here, we present a novel divide-and-conquer method to sequence and de novo assemble the genomes of all of the different species present in a microbial sample with a sequencing cost and computational complexity proportional to the number of species, not the number of cells.
Revised:  Here, we present a novel divide and conquer method to sequence and de novo assemble the genomes of all of the different species present in a microbial sample with a sequencing cost and computational complexity proportional to the number of species, not the number of cells.
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Original:  Here, we present a novel divide-and-conquer method to sequence and de novo assemble the genomes of all of the different species present in a microbial sample with a sequencing cost and computational complexity proportional to the number of species, not the number of cells.
Revised:  Here, we present a novel divide-and-conquer method to sequence and de novo assemble all distinct genomes present in a microbial sample with a sequencing cost and computational complexity proportional to the number of species, not the number of cells.
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Original:  Here, we present a novel divide-and-conquer method to sequence and de novo assemble the genomes of all of the different species present in a microbial sample with a sequencing cost and computational complexity proportional to the number of species, not the number of cells.
Revised:  Here, we present a novel divide-and-conquer method to sequence and de novo assemble the genomes of all of the different species present in a microbial sample with a sequencing cost and computational complexity proportional to the number of genome types, rather than the number of cells.
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Original:  The proposed divide-and-conquer method successfully reduces the cost of sequencing in comparison with the naive exhaustive approach. 
Revised:  The proposed divide and conquer method successfully reduces the cost of sequencing in comparison with the naive exhaustive approach. 
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Original:  First, we show that  the threshold's location modifies the correlation between changes in life expectancy and lifespan inequality , illustrating this over two centuries in Sweden . Second, we analyze the post Second World War trajectories of lifespan inequality in a set of developed countries, focusing on Japan, Canada and the United States (US) . Here, the thresholds centered on retirement age.
Revised:  First, we show that the threshold's location modified the correlation between changes in life expectancy and lifespan inequality , illustrating this over two centuries in Sweden . Second, we analyze the post Second World War trajectories of lifespan inequality in a set of developed countries, focusing on Japan, Canada and the United States (US) . Here, the thresholds centered on retirement age.
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Original:  First, we show that  the threshold's location modifies the correlation between changes in life expectancy and lifespan inequality , illustrating this over two centuries in Sweden . Second, we analyze the post Second World War trajectories of lifespan inequality in a set of developed countries, focusing on Japan, Canada and the United States (US) . Here, the thresholds centered on retirement age.
Revised:  First, we show that the threshold's location modifies the correlation between changes in life expectancy and lifespan inequality over the last two centuries . Second, we analyze the post Second World War trajectories of lifespan inequality in a set of developed countries, focusing on Japan, Canada and the United States (US) . Here, the thresholds centered on retirement age.
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Original:  First, we show that  the threshold's location modifies the correlation between changes in life expectancy and lifespan inequality , illustrating this over two centuries in Sweden . Second, we analyze the post Second World War trajectories of lifespan inequality in a set of developed countries, focusing on Japan, Canada and the United States (US) . Here, the thresholds centered on retirement age.
Revised:  First, we show that the threshold's location modifies the correlation between changes in life expectancy and lifespan inequality , illustrating this over two centuries in Sweden . Second, we analyze the post Second World War trajectories of lifespan inequality in a set of developed countries, Japan, Canada and the United States (US) . Here, the thresholds centered on retirement age.
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Original:  First, we show that  the threshold's location modifies the correlation between changes in life expectancy and lifespan inequality , illustrating this over two centuries in Sweden . Second, we analyze the post Second World War trajectories of lifespan inequality in a set of developed countries, focusing on Japan, Canada and the United States (US) . Here, the thresholds centered on retirement age.
Revised:  First, we show that the threshold's location modifies the correlation between changes in life expectancy and lifespan inequality , illustrating this over two centuries in Sweden . Second, we analyze the post Second World War trajectories of lifespan inequality in a set of developed countries, focusing on Japan, Canada and the United States (US) , where thresholds centered on retirement age.
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Original:  Early in the 1980s, mortality increases in young US males , led lifespan inequality to remain high in the US, while in Canada there were steady declines .
Revised:  Early in the 1980s, mortality increases in young US males led lifespan inequality to remain high in the US, while in Canada there were steady declines .
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Original:  Early in the 1980s, mortality increases in young US males , led lifespan inequality to remain high in the US, while in Canada there were steady declines .
Revised:  Early in the 1980s, mortality increases in young US males , led lifespan inequality to remain high in the US, while in Canada the decline of inequality continued .
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Original:  In general, post Second World War mortality change varied most at young working ages , particularly in males.
Revised:  In general, post Second World War mortality change varied most at young working ages after the Second World War, particularly for males.
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Original:  We conclude that if mortality decline continues to stagnate at young ages, but to progress steadily at old ages, lifespan inequality increases will become more common .
Revised:  We conclude that if mortality continues to stagnate at young ages, but to progress steadily at old ages, lifespan inequality increases will become more common .
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Original:  We conclude that if mortality decline continues to stagnate at young ages, but to progress steadily at old ages, lifespan inequality increases will become more common .
Revised:  We conclude that if mortality decline continues to stagnate at young ages, yet declines steadily at old ages, lifespan inequality increases will become more common .
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Original:  We conclude that if mortality decline continues to stagnate at young ages, but to progress steadily at old ages, lifespan inequality increases will become more common .
Revised:  We conclude that if mortality decline continues to stagnate at young ages, but to progress steadily at old ages, increases in lifespan inequality will become a common feature of future demographic change .
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Original:  Although remarkable progress has been made in finding particular solutions to these systems, our knowledge of the general properties of the space of all possible dynamical systems of this kind is very small .
Revised:  Although exceptional progress has been made in finding particular solutions to these systems, our knowledge of the general properties of the space of all possible dynamical systems of this kind is very small .
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Original:  Although remarkable progress has been made in finding particular solutions to these systems, our knowledge of the general properties of the space of all possible dynamical systems of this kind is very small .
Revised:  Although remarkable progress has been made in finding particular solutions to these systems, our knowledge of the general properties of the space of all possible dynamical systems of this kind is still limited .
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Original: We see an increasing demand for in-the-cloud middlebox processing as applications and enterprises want their cloud deployments to leverage the same benefits that such services offer in traditional deployments.
Revised: Enterprises want their in-cloud services to leverage the same benefits that such services offer in traditional deployments.
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Original:  We demonstrate the effectiveness of Stratos using an experimental prototype , a limited deployment over EC2, and large-scale simulations.
Revised:  We demonstrate the effectiveness of Stratos using an experimental prototype testbed and large-scale simulations.
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Original:  The scale-free cubic RBF kernel is shown to perform better than the Gaussian kernel , as it does not require the difficult-to-choose scale parameter as an input , and does not suffer from ill-conditioning .
Revised:  The scale-free cubic RBF kernel performs better than the Gaussian kernel , as it does not require the difficult-to-choose scale parameter as an input , and does not suffer from ill-conditioning .
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Original:  The scale-free cubic RBF kernel is shown to perform better than the Gaussian kernel , as it does not require the difficult-to-choose scale parameter as an input , and does not suffer from ill-conditioning .
Revised:  The scale-free cubic RBF kernel is shown to perform better than the Gaussian kernel : it does not require the difficult-to-choose scale parameter as an input , and does not suffer from ill-conditioning .
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Original:  The scale-free cubic RBF kernel is shown to perform better than the Gaussian kernel , as it does not require the difficult-to-choose scale parameter as an input , and does not suffer from ill-conditioning .
Revised:  The scale-free cubic RBF kernel is shown to perform better than the Gaussian kernel , as it does not suffer from ill-conditioning , and does not suffer from ill-conditioning .
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Original:  The scale-free cubic RBF kernel is shown to perform better than the Gaussian kernel , as it does not require the difficult-to-choose scale parameter as an input , and does not suffer from ill-conditioning .
Revised:  The scale-free cubic RBF kernel is shown to perform better than the Gaussian kernel , as it does not require the difficult-to-choose scale parameter as an input , and does not require the choice of a scale .
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Original:  The proposed numerical inverse is shown to be mathematically similar to the eigenvector interpolation known as the Nystr\"om method, a commonly used numerical method for rapid approximation of eigenvectors of a dense weight matrix.
Revised:  The proposed construction is shown to be mathematically similar to the eigenvector interpolation known as the Nystr\"om method, a commonly used numerical method for rapid approximation of eigenvectors of a dense weight matrix.
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Original:  The proposed numerical inverse is shown to be mathematically similar to the eigenvector interpolation known as the Nystr\"om method, a commonly used numerical method for rapid approximation of eigenvectors of a dense weight matrix.
Revised:  The proposed numerical inverse is shown to be similar to the eigenvector interpolation known as the Nystr\"om method, a commonly used numerical method for rapid approximation of eigenvectors of a dense weight matrix.
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Original:  The proposed numerical inverse is shown to be mathematically similar to the eigenvector interpolation known as the Nystr\"om method, a commonly used numerical method for rapid approximation of eigenvectors of a dense weight matrix.
Revised:  The proposed numerical inverse is shown to be mathematically similar to the Nystr\"om method, a commonly used numerical method for rapid approximation of eigenvectors of a dense weight matrix.
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Original:  Based on this observation, a critique of the Nystr\"om method is provided, with suggestions for improvement.
Revised:  Based on this observation, we provide a new interpretation of the Nystr\"om method is provided, with suggestions for improvement.
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Original:  Based on this observation, a critique of the Nystr\"om method is provided, with suggestions for improvement.
Revised:  Based on this observation, a critique of the Nystr\"om extension with suggestions for improvement.
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