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Original: Diamond Brownridge  a 5-year old girl from Chicago, Illinois  has died after a visit to the dentist.
Revised: Diamond Brownridge a 5-year old girl from Chicago, Illinois , has died after a visit to the dentist.
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Original: According to the family, the girl had been given at least a triple dose of medicine that sedated her.
Revised: According to the family, the girl had been given at least a tripple dose of medicine that sedated her.
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Original:  Those drugs include ;
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Original: According to the family, the girl had been given at least a tripple dose of medicine that sedated her.
Revised: According to the family, the girl had been given at least a triple dose of medicine that sedated her.
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Original:  I don't think I will ever go back to a normal life after an experience like this," Riba said in a statement on Wednesday  September 28.
Revised:  I don't think I will ever go back to a normal life after an experience like this," Riba said in a statement on Wednesday , September 28.
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Original:  The report estimated revenues from growing and trafficking to be half of Afghanistan's gross domestic product  
Revised:  The report estimated revenues from growing and trafficking to be half of Afghanistan's gross domestic product . 
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Original:  Category:Deletion requests Afghanistan is the #1 producer of opium in the world - responsible for 87\% of all illicit opium production - according to reports from the United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime (UNODC), and its opium production has accelerated since the coalition invasion in 2001.
Revised:  Afghanistan is the #1 producer of opium in the world - responsible for 87\% of all illicit opium production - according to reports from the United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime (UNODC), and its opium production has accelerated since the coalition invasion in 2001.
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Original:  The UNODC report for 2004 shows a 64\% increase over the previous year in opium production hectares, and a 22\% increase in export value for the year(US$2.8 billion  .
Revised:  The UNODC report for 2004 shows a 64\% increase over the previous year in opium production hectares, and a 22\% increase in export value for the year(US$2.8 billion ) .
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Original:  The UNODC report for 2004 shows a 64\% increase over the previous year in opium production hectares , and a 22\% increase in export value for the year(US$2.8 billion).
Revised:  The UNODC report for 2004 shows a 64\% increase over the previous year in the area of opium production , and a 22\% increase in export value for the year(US$2.8 billion).
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Original:  The strike is ongoing and has now spread widely in Denmark and even some some localities near Copenhagen, the Danish capital, have been experiencing strikes by public sector employees . URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Denmark Category:Euro
Revised:  The strike is ongoing and has now spread widely in Denmark and even some some localities near Copenhagen, the Danish capital, have been experiencing strikes by public sector employees URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Denmark Category:Euro
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Original:  The strike is ongoing and has now spread widely in Denmark and even some some localities near Copenhagen, the Danish capital, have been experiencing strikes by public sector employees . URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Denmark Category:Euro
Revised:  The strike is ongoing and has now spread widely in Denmark and even some some localities near Copenhagen, the Danish capital, have been experiencing strikes by public sector employees . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Denmark Category:Euro
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Original:  The strike is ongoing and has now spread widely in Denmark and even some some localities near Copenhagen, the Danish capital, have been experiencing strikes by public sector employees . URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Denmark Category:Euro
Revised:  The strike is ongoing and has now spread widely in Denmark and even some some localities near Copenhagen, the Danish capital, have been experiencing strikes by public sector employees . URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: In Denmark's second largest city, Aarhus in the province of Jutland, a growing battle of wills is developing between , on one side, politicians striving to make budgetary cuts for 2007, and on the other, parents, teachers and social workers.
Revised: In Denmark's second largest city, Aarhus in the province of Jutland, a growing battle of wills is developing between politicians striving to make budgetary cuts for 2007, and on the other, parents, teachers and social workers.
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Original: In Denmark's second largest city, Aarhus in the province of Jutland, a growing battle of wills is developing between , on one side, politicians striving to make budgetary cuts for 2007, and on the other, parents, teachers and social workers.
Revised: In Denmark's second largest city, Aarhus in the province of Jutland, a growing battle of wills is developing between , on one side, politicians striving to make budgetary cuts for 2007, and parents, teachers and social workers.
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Original:  The dispute broke out on Friday 22nd September 2006 when blockades of day-care centres across the city by parents  teachers and other city council employees made national headlines, in a country in which industrial action of this kind is very unusual.
Revised:  The dispute broke out on Friday , September 22, when blockades of day-care centres across the city by parents teachers and other city council employees made national headlines, in a country in which industrial action of this kind is very unusual.
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Original:  The dispute broke out on Friday 22nd September 2006 when blockades of day-care centres across the city by parents  teachers and other city council employees made national headlines, in a country in which industrial action of this kind is very unusual.
Revised:  The dispute broke out on Friday 22nd September 2006 when blockades of day-care centres across the city by parents , teachers and other city council employees made national headlines, in a country in which industrial action of this kind is very unusual.
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Original:  The situation looked at one pointas though it might turn nasty with the city council asking police to intervene to break the blockades of the day-centres, although a last-minute change of heart by the council averted direct confrontation.
Revised:  At one point, the city council asking police to intervene to break the blockades of the day-centres, although a last-minute change of heart by the council averted direct confrontation.
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Original:  The situation looked at one pointas though it might turn nasty with the city council asking police to intervene to break the blockades of the day-centres, although a last-minute change of heart by the council averted direct confrontation.
Revised:  The situation looked at one pointas though it might turn nasty with the city council asked the police to intervene to break the blockades of the day-centres, although a last-minute change of heart by the council averted direct confrontation.
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Original:  The dispute broke out on Friday, September 22, when blockades of day-care centres across the city  by parents, teachers and other city council employees made national headlines, in a country in which industrial action of this kind is very unusual .
Revised:  The dispute broke out on Friday, September 22, when day-care centres across the city by parents, teachers and other city council employees made national headlines, in a country in which industrial action of this kind is very unusual .
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Original:  The dispute broke out on Friday, September 22, when blockades of day-care centres across the city  by parents, teachers and other city council employees made national headlines, in a country in which industrial action of this kind is very unusual .
Revised:  The dispute broke out on Friday, September 22, when blockades of day-care centres across the city were blockaded by parents, teachers and other city council employees made national headlines, in a country in which industrial action of this kind is very unusual .
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Original:  The dispute broke out on Friday, September 22, when blockades of day-care centres across the city  by parents, teachers and other city council employees made national headlines, in a country in which industrial action of this kind is very unusual .
Revised:  The dispute broke out on Friday, September 22, when blockades of day-care centres across the city by parents, teachers and other city council employees .
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Original:  At one point, the city council asked the police to intervene to break the blockades of the day-centres, although a last-minute change of heart by the council averted direct confrontation    .
Revised:  At one point, the city council asked the police to intervene to break the blockades of the day-centres, although a last-minute change of heart by the council averted direct confrontation . .
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Original: The Paralympic Village officially opened this past Wednesday in London  with many nations having moved in as of today in preparation for the start this coming Wednesday.
Revised: The Paralympic Village officially opened this past Wednesday in London , with many nations having moved in as of today in preparation for the start this coming Wednesday.
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Original:  There are limits to the amount of access the press has been given to Paralympic competitors because, as volunteers are quick to remind you,  came to London to compete and an overly intrusive press corps makes that difficult.
Revised:  There are limits to the amount of access the press has been given to Paralympic competitors because, as volunteers are quick to remind you, the athletes came to London to compete and an overly intrusive press corps makes that difficult.
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Original: The Paralympic Village officially opened this past Wednesday in London, with many nations having moved in as of today in preparation for the start this coming Wednesday.
Revised: The Paralympic Village officially opened on Wednesday in London, with many nations having moved in as of today in preparation for the start this coming Wednesday.
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Original:  At the same time, the Paralympic Games organisers are also trying to give competitors as much privacy in the village as they can
Revised:  At the same time, the Paralympic Games organisers are trying to give competitors as much privacy in the village as they can
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Original:  At the same time, the Paralympic Games organisers are also trying to give competitors as much privacy in the village as they can
Revised:  At the same time, the Paralympic Games organisers are also trying to give competitors as much privacy in the village as possible
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Original: Sony also admitted the recalls would cost up to 30 billion yen, which is a quarter of Sony's profits in 2005.
Revised: Sony previously admitted the recalls would cost up to 30 billion yen, which is a quarter of Sony's profits in 2005.
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Original:  Since Dell announced recalls in August, Sony's stock has lost  9\% of it's value.
Revised:  Since Dell announced recalls in August, Sony's stock has lost almost 9\% of it's value.
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Original:  Following Sony's statement, Fujitsu too stated it would replace the batteries involved.
Revised:  Following Sony's statement, Fujitsu too declared it would replace the batteries involved.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Toshiba added that the company doesn't expect there to be any problems with personal computers, but it will replace their Sony batteries anyway, over customer concerns , although the company doesn't expect to pick up the tab for it.
Revised:  A spokesperson for Toshiba added that the company doesn't expect there to be any problems with personal computers, but it will replace their Sony batteries anyway, over customer concerns . However, the company doesn't expect to pick up the tab for it.
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Original:  According to Sony, microscopic metal particles are to blame for overheating and potentially flames "under certain rare conditions"  
Revised:  According to Sony, microscopic metal particles are to blame for overheating and potentially flames "under certain rare conditions" . 
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Original:  According to Sony, microscopic metal particles are to blame for overheating and potentially flames "under certain rare conditions".
Revised:  According to Sony, microscopic metal particles are to blame for overheating and potentially catching fire "under certain rare conditions".
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Original:  Several news sources expect this to reflect badly on the company, as this adds to problems with the PlayStation 3 and Blu-Ray DVD.
Revised:  Several news sources expect this to reflect badly on the company, as it adds to problems with the PlayStation 3 and Blu-Ray DVD.
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Original:  Since Dell announced recalls in August, Sony's stock has lost almost 9\% of it's value.
Revised:  Since Dell announced recalls in August, Sony's stock has lost almost 9\% of its value.
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Original:  Dell expanded it's program to include about 4.2 million portables.
Revised:  Dell expanded its program to include about 4.2 million portables.
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Original: Sony previously admitted the recalls anounced by Apple and Dell would cost up to 30 billion yen, which is a quarter of Sony's profits in 2005.
Revised: Sony previously admitted the recalls announced by Apple and Dell would cost up to 30 billion yen, which is a quarter of Sony's profits in 2005.
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Original:  Former American astronaut has died at the age of 82  due to complications following heart bypass surgery earlier this month.
Revised:  Former American astronaut has died at the age of 82 , due to complications following heart bypass surgery earlier this month.
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Original:  He is known as the first person to walk on the moon as commander of Apollo 11 , the first manned mission to land on the moon.
Revised:  He is known as the first person to walk on the moon when commander of , the first manned mission to land on the moon.
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Original:  Armstrong was born on August 5, 1930 in Wapakoneta, Ohio .
Revised:  Armstrong was born on August 5, 1930 in .
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Original:  On March 16, 1996, he became the first American civilian to orbit Earth while onboard Gemini VIII, along with crewmate Davis R. Scott.
Revised:  On March 16, 1996, he became the first American civilian to orbit Earth whilst onboard with crewmate Davis R. Scott.
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Original:  After Gemini VIII docked with another spacecraft in orbit, it began to tumble out of control due to a faulty thruster.
Revised:  Following Gemini VIII's docked with another spacecraft in orbit, it began to tumble out of control due to a faulty thruster.
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Original:  After Gemini VIII docked with another spacecraft in orbit, it began to tumble out of control due to a faulty thruster.
Revised:  After Gemini VIII docked with another spacecraft in orbit, it began tumbling out of control due to a faulty thruster.
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Original:  The Eagle has landed" upon landing . Upon stepping on to the surface of the Moon on July 20, 1969, he famously said, "That's one small step for [a] man, one giant leap for mankind."
Revised:  The Eagle has landed" . Upon stepping on to the surface of the Moon on July 20, 1969, he famously said, "That's one small step for [a] man, one giant leap for mankind."
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Original:  The landing  and subsequent moonwalk  was watched by half a billion people around the world.
Revised:  The landing , and subsequent moonwalk was watched by half a billion people around the world.
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Original:  The landing  and subsequent moonwalk  was watched by half a billion people around the world.
Revised:  The landing and subsequent moonwalk , was watched by half a billion people around the world.
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Original:  Armstrong and Aldrin spent about two hours walking on the lunar surface before lifting off the Moon.
Revised:  Armstrong and Aldrin spent approximately two hours walking on the lunar surface before lifting off the Moon.
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Original:  Armstrong and Aldrin spent about two hours walking on the lunar surface before lifting off the Moon.
Revised:  Armstrong and Aldrin spent about two hours walking on the lunar surface before lifting off for
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Original:  Apollo 11 returned to Earth on July 24.
Revised:  Apollo 11 's return to Earth on July 24.
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Original:  He also taught engineering at the University of Cincinnati, and was appointed to panels investigating the Apollo 13 and Challenger disasters.
Revised:  He also taught engineering at the , he was appointed to panels investigating the Apollo 13 and Challenger disasters.
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Original:  Following Gemini VIII's docked with another spacecraft in orbit, it began tumbling out of control due to a faulty thruster.
Revised:  Following Gemini VIII's docking with another spacecraft in orbit, it began tumbling out of control due to a faulty thruster.
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Original:  In the letter, Air Chief Marshall Tyagi writes, Several inductions planned by the IAF, such as the Light Combat Aircraft and the Mutirole Medium Renge Combat Aircraft, have been delayed.
Revised:  In the letter, Air Chief Marshal Tyagi writes, Several inductions planned by the IAF, such as the Light Combat Aircraft and the Mutirole Medium Renge Combat Aircraft, have been delayed.
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Original:  In his letter, the Air Chief Marshall has asked that the Government aqcuire 40 Su-30 MKIs from Russia as soon as possible, induct the 126 Mutirole Medium Range Combat Aircraft at the earliest and also urge Russia to honour their committment of not allowing China to sell planes with Russian engines to Pakistan
Revised:  In his letter, the Air Chief Marshal has asked the Government to acquire 40 Su-30 MKIs from Russia as soon as possible, induct the 126 Mutirole Medium Range Combat Aircraft at the earliest and also urge Russia to honour their committment of not allowing China to sell planes with Russian engines to Pakistan
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Original: The top-brass of the Indian Air Force has sent a three-page letter to Defence Minister Pranab Mukherjee, warning him that the IAF is in danger of losing its traditional air-superiority to Pakistan.
Revised: The top-brass of the Indian Air Force has sent a three-page letter to Defence Minister Pranab Mukherjee, warning him that the IAF is in danger of losing its long-standing air-superiority to Pakistan.
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Original: The top-brass of the Indian Air Force has sent a three-page letter to Defence Minister Pranab Mukherjee, warning him that the IAF is in danger of losing its traditional air-superiority to Pakistan.
Revised: The top-brass of the Indian Air Force has sent a three-page letter to Defence Minister Pranab Mukherjee, warning him that the IAF is in danger of losing its traditional air-superiority over Pakistan.
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Original: The top-brass of the Indian Air Force  has sent a three-page letter to Defence Minister Pranab Mukherjee, warning him that the IAF is in danger of losing its long-standing air-superiority over Pakistan.
Revised: The top-brass of the Indian Air Force (IAF) has sent a three-page letter to Defence Minister Pranab Mukherjee, warning him that the IAF is in danger of losing its long-standing air-superiority over Pakistan.
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Original:  In the letter, Air Chief Marshal Tyagi writes, Additional Director , Air Power Studies, Kapil Kak said, "This aircraft induction will take at least 10 years from today and in those 10 years, the MiG 21's will progress if they get wound down.
Revised:  In the letter, Air Chief Marshal Tyagi writes, Additional Director of Air Power Studies, Kapil Kak said, "This aircraft induction will take at least 10 years from today and in those 10 years, the MiG 21's will progress if they get wound down.
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Original:  Their total technical life and design life will end and we will have the Air Force combat force strength winding down, worringly fast."
Revised:  Their total technical life and design life will end and we will have the Air Force combat force strength winding down, worryingly fast."
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Original:  In his letter, the Air Chief Marshal has asked the Government to acquire 40 Su-30 MKIs from Russia as soon as possible, induct the 126 Mutirole Medium Range Combat Aircraft at the earliest and also urge Russia to honour their committment of not allowing China to sell planes with Russian engines to Pakistan
Revised:  In his letter, the Air Chief Marshal has asked the Government to acquire 40 Su-30 MKIs from Russia as soon as possible, induct the 126 Multirole Medium Range Combat Aircraft at the earliest and also urge Russia to honour their committment of not allowing China to sell planes with Russian engines to Pakistan
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Original:  In his letter, the Air Chief Marshal has asked the Government to acquire 40 Su-30 MKIs from Russia as soon as possible, induct the 126 Mutirole Medium Range Combat Aircraft at the earliest and also urge Russia to honour their committment of not allowing China to sell planes with Russian engines to Pakistan
Revised:  In his letter, the Air Chief Marshal has asked the Government to acquire 40 Su-30 MKIs from Russia as soon as possible, induct the 126 Mutirole Medium Range Combat Aircraft at the earliest and also urge Russia to honour their commitment of not allowing China to sell planes with Russian engines to Pakistan
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Original: " Pakistan Air Force (PAF) is being beefed up with 44 F16s from America.
Revised:  Pakistan Air Force (PAF) is being beefed up with 44 F16s from America.
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Original:  " " Unless steps are taken to move ahead with procurement, the IAF's combat strength will deplete to a level, which would entirely neutralise the conventional superiority held by IAF since our Independence.
Revised:  " Unless steps are taken to move ahead with procurement, the IAF's combat strength will deplete to a level, which would entirely neutralise the conventional superiority held by IAF since our Independence.
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Original:  PAF will have 19 to 26 squadrons by 2011-12, while the IAF could reduce to 26.5 by 2015. "
Revised:  PAF will have 19 to 26 squadrons by 2011-12, while the IAF could reduce to 26.5 by 2015. 
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Original:  In the letter , Air Chief Marshal Tyagi writes ,
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Original:  It was annonced at the rally that the Canadian solier was killed by a bomb.
Revised:  It was announced at the rally that the Canadian solier was killed by a bomb.
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Original:  It was annonced at the rally that the Canadian solier was killed by a bomb.
Revised:  It was annonced at the rally that the Canadian soldier was killed by a bomb.
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Original:  All of Toronto wore red in support for the troops.
Revised:  Many in Toronto wore red in support for the troops.
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Original: Earlier today at 12 pm , there was a rally called Red Friday for the Canadian troops in Afghanistan held in the Younge-Dundas Square in Toronto, Ontario.
Revised: Earlier today at 12 p.m. , there was a rally called Red Friday for the Canadian troops in Afghanistan held in the Younge-Dundas Square in Toronto, Ontario.
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