wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人)  1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴)  1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去)  1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997  1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙)  1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽)  1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴)  2001 – Headlines (頭號人物)  2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪  )
Revised:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人) 1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴) 1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去) 1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997 1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙) 1999 : Gorgeous (玻璃樽) 1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴) 2001 – Headlines (頭號人物) 2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪 )
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人)  1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴)  1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去)  1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997  1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙)  1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽)  1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴)  2001 – Headlines (頭號人物)  2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪  )
Revised:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人) 1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴) 1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去) 1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997 1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙) 1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽) - L.W. Lo 1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴) 2001 – Headlines (頭號人物) 2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪 )
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人)  1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴)  1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去)  1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997  1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙)  1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽)  1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴)  2001 – Headlines (頭號人物)  2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪  )
Revised:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人) 1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴) 1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去) 1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997 1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙) 1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽) 1999 : Purple Storm (紫雨風暴) 2001 – Headlines (頭號人物) 2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪 )
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人)  1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴)  1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去)  1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997  1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙)  1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽)  1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴)  2001 – Headlines (頭號人物)  2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪  )
Revised:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人) 1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴) 1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去) 1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997 1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙) 1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽) 1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴) - Ma Li 2001 – Headlines (頭號人物) 2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪 )
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人)  1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴)  1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去)  1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997  1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙)  1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽)  1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴)  2001 – Headlines (頭號人物)  2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪  )
Revised:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人) 1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴) 1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去) 1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997 1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙) 1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽) 1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴) 2001 : Headlines (頭號人物) 2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪 )
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人)  1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴)  1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去)  1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997  1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙)  1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽)  1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴)  2001 – Headlines (頭號人物)  2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪  )
Revised:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人) 1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴) 1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去) 1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997 1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙) 1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽) 1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴) 2001 – Headlines (頭號人物) - Sorrow Chan 2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪 )
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人)  1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴)  1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去)  1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997  1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙)  1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽)  1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴)  2001 – Headlines (頭號人物)  2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪  )
Revised:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人) 1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴) 1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去) 1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997 1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙) 1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽) 1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴) 2001 – Headlines (頭號人物) 2003 : Homerun - Policeman 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪 )
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人)  1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴)  1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去)  1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997  1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙)  1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽)  1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴)  2001 – Headlines (頭號人物)  2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪  )
Revised:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人) 1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴) 1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去) 1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997 1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙) 1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽) 1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴) 2001 – Headlines (頭號人物) 2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 : The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪 )
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人)  1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴)  1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去)  1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997  1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙)  1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽)  1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴)  2001 – Headlines (頭號人物)  2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪  )
Revised:  Right Here Waiting (等愛的女人) 1995 – Just Married (橫紋刀劈扭紋柴) 1995 – I Want To Go on Living (我要活下去) 1995 – Faithfully Yours (叛逆情緣) 1995 – Rumble in the Bronx (Ice Cream Man) 1996 – Who's the Woman, Who's the Man? (金枝玉葉2) 1997 – All's Well, Ends Well 1997 1997 – Walk In (奪舍) 1997 – Mr. Nice Guy (Ice Cream Man) 1997 – 知解時空 1997 – Spicy Love Soup (愛情麻辣燙) 1999 – Gorgeous (玻璃樽) 1999 – Purple Storm (紫雨風暴) 2001 – Headlines (頭號人物) 2003 – Homerun (Policeman ) 2003 – The Pawnshop No. 8 (第八號當鋪 ) (TV Series )
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Original: Wakin Chau (born 22 December 1960), better known by his stage name Emil Chau predominantly throughout the 1980s and 1990s, is a Hong Kong-Taiwanese singer, songwriter and actor.
Revised: Wakin Chau (born 22 December 1960), better known by his stage name Emil Chau predominantly throughout the 1980s and 1990s, is a Hong Kong-born Taiwanese singer, songwriter and actor.
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Original: Biography Wakin Chau was born in a rice store owned by his family in Sai Ying Pun , Hong Kong.
Revised: Biography Wakin Chau was born in a rice store owned by his family at Sai Ying Pun , Hong Kong.
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Original:  The Flowery Heart (Apr 1993) Asia Tour'93 Emil Alive! (Jan 1994) Nothing Will Stop Me From Loving You (Jun 1994) I Am Willing to Go Soon (Feb 1995) Love Follows Us (Jul 1995) Light of Love (Feb 1996) My Little Paradise (Sep 1996) Emil & Friends (Apr 1997) Story Teller (Aug 1998) Now (Nov 1999) Day Lilies (Otc 2001) All Out (2003) Love Hotel (Jul 2003) Keep Wakin 1987-2002 (Sep 2003) Wakin in the Rain (Mar 2006) Diva (May 2011) Jiang Hu (Dec 2013) My Farewell Lady (Mar 2019) 
Revised:  The Flowery Heart (Apr 1993) Asia Tour'93 Emil Alive! (Jan 1994) Nothing Will Stop Me From Loving You (Jun 1994) I Am Willing to Go Soon (Feb 1995) Love Follows Us (Jul 1995) Light of Love (Feb 1996) My Little Paradise (Sep 1996) Emil & Friends (Apr 1997) Story Teller (Aug 1998) Now (Nov 1999) Day Lilies (Otc 2001) All Out (2003) Love Hotel (Jul 2003) Keep Wakin 1987-2002 (Sep 2003) Wakin in the Rain (Mar 2006) Diva (May 2011) Jiang Hu (Dec 2013) My Farewell Lady (Mar 2019) The Younger Me (Dec 2019)
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Original:  Asia Tour'93 Emil Alive! (Jan 1994) Nothing Will Stop Me From Loving You (Jun 1994) I Am Willing to Go Soon (Feb 1995) Love Follows Us (Jul 1995) Light of Love (Feb 1996) My Little Paradise (Sep 1996) Emil & Friends (Apr 1997) Story Teller (Aug 1998) Now (Nov 1999) Day Lilies (Otc 2001) All Out (2003) Love Hotel (Jul 2003) Keep Wakin 1987-2002 (Sep 2003) Wakin in the Rain (Mar 2006) Diva (May 2011) Jiang Hu (Dec 2013) My Farewell Lady (Mar 2019) The Younger Me (Dec 2019) 
Revised:  Asia Tour'93 Emil Alive! (Jan 1994) Nothing Will Stop Me From Loving You (Jun 1994) I Am Willing to Go Soon (Feb 1995) Love Follows Us (Jul 1995) Light of Love (Feb 1996) My Little Paradise (Sep 1996) Emil & Friends (Apr 1997) Story Teller (Aug 1998) Now (Nov 1999) Day Lilies (Otc 2001) All Out (2003) Love Hotel (Jul 2003) Keep Wakin 1987-2002 (Sep 2003) Wakin in the Rain (Mar 2006) Diva (May 2011) Jiang Hu (Dec 2013) My Farewell Lady (Mar 2019) The Younger Me (Dec 2019) A Song for You (Feb 2020)
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Original: That moment opened the door for Wakin to record and release his first Mandarin album under the Rock Records label in 1987.
Revised: This opened the door for Wakin to record and release his first Mandarin album under the Rock Records label in 1987.
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Original: Wakin Chau (born 22 December 1960), better known by his stage name Emil Chau predominantly throughout the 1980s and 1990s, is a Hong Kong-born Taiwanese singer, songwriter and actor .
Revised: Wakin Chau (born 22 December 1960), better known by his stage name Emil Chau during the 1980s and 1990s, is a Hong Kong-born Taiwanese singer, songwriter and actor .
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Original:  As of August 2007, he has released more than 40 albums and held several international concert tours . Biography Wakin Chau was born in a rice store owned by his family at Sai Ying Pun in then-British colony of Hong Kong.
Revised:  As of August 2007, he has released more than 40 albums . Biography Wakin Chau was born in a rice store owned by his family at Sai Ying Pun in then-British colony of Hong Kong.
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Original:  As of August 2007, he has released more than 40 albums and held several international concert tours . Biography Wakin Chau was born in a rice store owned by his family at Sai Ying Pun in then-British colony of Hong Kong.
Revised:  As of August 2007, he has released more than 40 albums and held several international concert tours . Early life Wakin Chau was born in a rice store owned by his family at Sai Ying Pun in then-British colony of Hong Kong.
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Original:  Growing up as the fourth son in his seven-member family, Wakin learned to play the guitar when he was about 13 years old.
Revised:  Growing up as the fourth son of seven children. He began learning the guitar when he was about 13 years old.
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Original:  During his college years, he sang and played folk songs in local coffee shops .
Revised:  While at college he sang and played folk songs in local coffee shops .
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Original:  This activity was a tradition among NTU students, and it is how Wakin learned to sing in Mandarin , which would be key to his future as a music-maker in Taiwan .
Revised:  This activity was a tradition among NTU students, and it is how Wakin learned to sing in Mandarin .
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Original:  Wakin had high hopes to establish a career as a recording artist, and he actively sought out contacts in the music industry .
Revised:  Music career Hoping to establish a career as a recording artist, and he actively sought out contacts in the music industry .
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Original:  Wakin had high hopes to establish a career as a recording artist, and he actively sought out contacts in the music industry .
Revised:  Wakin had high hopes to establish a career as a recording artist, Chau sought contacts in the music industry .
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Original:  But a persistent lack of interest eventually led him to give up trying to become a performer – instead, he could sign on as an assistant producer at Rock Records, where he wrote marketable pop songs for other artists.
Revised:  But a persistent lack of interest eventually led him to give up trying to become a performer – instead, he could sign on as an assistant producer at Rock Records, where he wrote pop songs for other artists.
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Original:  Wakin was later encouraged by Chyi Yu to sing some jingles for commercial advertising spots .
Revised:  He was later encouraged by Chyi Yu to sing some jingles for commercial advertising spots .
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Original:  Wakin was later encouraged by Chyi Yu to sing some jingles for commercial advertising spots .
Revised:  Wakin was later encouraged by Chyi Yu to perform jingles for commercial advertising spots .
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Original:  Wakin was later encouraged by Chyi Yu to sing some jingles for commercial advertising spots .
Revised:  Wakin was later encouraged by Chyi Yu to sing some jingles for commercial advertisements .
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Original:  One of these tunes was for a car commercial , and it happened to catch the attention of Wakin's boss at Rock, who realised it was the voice of his own assistant producer.
Revised:  One of his jingles for a car commercial , and it happened to catch the attention of Wakin's boss at Rock, who realised it was the voice of his own assistant producer.
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Original:  One of these tunes was for a car commercial , and it happened to catch the attention of Wakin's boss at Rock, who realised it was the voice of his own assistant producer.
Revised:  One of these tunes was for a car commercial was heard by his boss at Rock, who realised it was the voice of his own assistant producer.
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Original:  One of these tunes was for a car commercial , and it happened to catch the attention of Wakin's boss at Rock, who realised it was the voice of his own assistant producer.
Revised:  One of these tunes was for a car commercial , and it happened to catch the attention of Wakin's boss at Rock, who 
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Original:  This opened the door for Wakin to record and release his first Mandarin albumunder the Rock Records label in 1987, and it was a period of particularly good fortune for Chau as he launched a succession of chart-topping records.
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Original:  They have a son named Andrew and a daughter named Anya.
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Original:  From 1985,  Emil Chau, who has been using his given name Wakin since 1999, has released more than 40 albums in Mandarin, Cantonese and English.
Revised:  From 1985, under the name Emil Chau, who has been using his given name Wakin since 1999, has released more than 40 albums in Mandarin, Cantonese and English.
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Original:  From 1985,  Emil Chau, who has been using his given name Wakin since 1999, has released more than 40 albums in Mandarin, Cantonese and English.
Revised:  From 1985, Emil Chau, he has released more than 40 albums in Mandarin, Cantonese and English.
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Original:  He has become a prominent name in the music of Taiwan and has fans of all ages not only around Asia but also in North America, Europe and elsewhere.
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Original:  His platinum albums such as You Make Me Happy and Sad (), The Flowery Heart (), Music Brings Us Together (), and Emil & Friends () have won awards in Taiwan, Mainland China, Hong Kong and Singapore. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wakin has appeared in a number of filmsand made guest appearances   on TV and radio programs in China, Hong Kong, Taiwan, Malaysia, Singapore and Japan.
Revised:  His platinum albums , including You Make Me Happy and Sad (), The Flowery Heart (), Music Brings Us Together (), and Emil & Friends () have won awards in Taiwan, Mainland China, Hong Kong and Singapore. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wakin has appeared in a number of filmsand made guest appearances on TV and radio programs in China, Hong Kong, Taiwan, Malaysia, Singapore and Japan.
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Original:  Alongside his singing career, he is a restaurateur and also is active in international charitable causes, such as kidney dialysis charities in Singapore, the January 2002 "Take a Deep Breath" concert in Taipei to raise money for local health-care organisations, Beijing's 4th Grand Charity Drive for Children in 2005, and Jackie Chan's all-star concerts in Las Vegas.
Revised:  Alongside his singing career, he is a restaurateur and is active in international charitable causes, such as kidney dialysis charities in Singapore, the January 2002 "Take a Deep Breath" concert in Taipei to raise money for local health-care organisations, Beijing's 4th Grand Charity Drive for Children in 2005, and Jackie Chan's all-star concerts in Las Vegas.
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Original:  He was honored with GUSI Peace PrizeNews on the Official Website of the Government of Philippines 2006 GUSI Peace PrizeGusi Peace Prize Foundation Profile of AwardeeGusi Peace Prize Award Ceremony Broadcast of the Acceptance Speech from Philippines for his engagement in religious affairs.
Revised:  He was honored with Gusi_Peace_PrizeNews on the Official Website of the Government of Philippines 2006 GUSI Peace PrizeGusi Peace Prize Foundation Profile of AwardeeGusi Peace Prize Award Ceremony Broadcast of the Acceptance Speech from Philippines for his engagement in religious affairs.
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Original:  He was honored with Gusi _Peace_PrizeNews on the Official Website of the Government of Philippines 2006 GUSI Peace PrizeGusi Peace Prize Foundation Profile of AwardeeGusi Peace Prize Award Ceremony Broadcast of the Acceptance Speech from Philippines for his engagement in religious affairs.
Revised:  He was honored with Gusi Peace PrizeNews on the Official Website of the Government of Philippines 2006 GUSI Peace PrizeGusi Peace Prize Foundation Profile of AwardeeGusi Peace Prize Award Ceremony Broadcast of the Acceptance Speech from Philippines for his engagement in religious affairs.
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Original:  He is also active in campaign against AIDS and Drug Abuse .
Revised:  He is also active in campaign against AIDS and drug abuse .
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Original: The Jakarta Post: Indonesian's Cabinet listThe Editor (1993).
Revised: The Jakarta Post: Indonesian's Cabinet list The Editor (1993).
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Original: Tarmizi Taher, MD ( Jawi: ;
Revised: Tarmizi Taher, MD ( 
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Original: One important issue that Rahner raises is about the salvation of those who have never had the opportunity to listen to the gospel  Jesus Christ.
Revised: One important issue that Rahner raises is about the salvation of those who have never had the opportunity to listen to the gospel of Jesus Christ.
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Original:  As a type of utilitarianism, it takes a subjective approach that admits that various viewpoints may work or not work for the individual, and that is the measure of truth, and any claims beyond that are speculation .
Revised:  As a type of utilitarianism, it takes a subjective approach that admits that various viewpoints may work or not work for the individual, and that is the measure of truth, and any claims beyond that are speculation 
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bibliography Ames, Edward Scribner.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bibliography Ames, Edward Scribner.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Theology Category:Religious studi
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Pluralism Pluralism is basically the belief that the world religions are true and equally valid in their communication of the truth about God, the world, and salvation.
Revised:  Pluralism Pluralism is the belief that the world religions are true and equally valid in their communication of the truth about God, the world, and salvation.
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Original:  Pluralism Pluralism is basically the belief that the world religions are true and equally valid in their communication of the truth about God, the world, and salvation.
Revised:  Pluralism Pluralism is basically the belief that multiple religions are true and equally valid in their communication of the truth about God, the world, and salvation.
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Original:  Hick challenges the older view that Christ or Christianity must be seen at the center of religions . Rather, he says, God must be seen at the center of religions .
Revised:  Hick challenges the older view that Christ or Christianity must be seen at the center of religions and argues instead that God must be seen at the center of religions .
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Original:  Pluralism has been criticized for masquerading as Christianity when in fact it is an invasive force that comes from outside of Christianity and imperialistically demands the surrender of Christian distinctiveness.
Revised:  Pluralism has been criticized as an invasive force that comes from outside of Christianity and imperialistically demands the surrender of Christian distinctiveness.
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