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Original: Three Children taken from New Mexico Compound A person from the compound said that "Recently representatives from CYFD  came to our land and kidnapped three teenagers who are part of our family here."
Revised: Three children taken from New Mexico Compound A person from the compound said that "Recently representatives from CYFD came to our land and kidnapped three teenagers who are part of our family here."
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Original: Three Children taken from New Mexico Compound A person from the compound said that "Recently representatives from CYFD  came to our land and kidnapped three teenagers who are part of our family here."
Revised: Three Children taken from New Mexico compound A person from the compound said that "Recently representatives from CYFD came to our land and kidnapped three teenagers who are part of our family here."
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Original: Three Children taken from New Mexico Compound A person from the compound said that "Recently representatives from CYFD  came to our land and kidnapped three teenagers who are part of our family here."
Revised: Three Children taken from New Mexico Compound A person from the compound said , "Recently representatives from CYFD came to our land and kidnapped three teenagers who are part of our family here."
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Original:  There were no moral grounds for them to be taken.  
Revised:  There were no moral grounds for them to be taken. " 
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Original:  The Daily Telegraph , a UK newspaper, reported that the food price in Burma could be affected by this incident  
Revised:  The Daily Telegraph , a UK newspaper, reported that the food price in Burma could be affected by this incident . 
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Original: At least 4,000 people have been reported dead after a tropical cyclone officially named "Nargis" struck Burma, which is also known as Myanmar.
Revised: At least 4,000 people have been reported dead after a cyclone hit Burma, which is also known as Myanmar.
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Original:  The Daily Telegraph , a UK newspaper, reported that the food price in Burma could be affected by this incident . Officials now say that the death toll, originally thought to be approximately 351, may rise as high as 10,000, as 3,000 people are now reported missing from a single town
Revised:  The Daily Telegraph , a UK newspaper, reported that the food price in Burma could be affected by this incident Officials now say that the death toll, originally thought to be approximately 351, may rise as high as 10,000, as 3,000 people are now reported missing from a single town
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Original:  The Daily Telegraph , a UK newspaper, reported that the food price in Burma could be affected by this incident . Officials now say that the death toll, originally thought to be approximately 351, may rise as high as 10,000, as 3,000 people are now reported missing from a single town
Revised:  The Daily Telegraph , a UK newspaper, reported that the food price in Burma could be affected by this incident . 
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Original:  The dual-engined Cessna 310, operated by Aero Star, lost contact with Air Traffic Control  eight miles (13km) off the coast near Ilheus, where it was intending to land in nine minutes time  .
Revised:  The dual-engined Cessna 310, operated by Aero Star, lost contact with Air Traffic Control (ATC) eight miles (13km) off the coast near Ilheus, where it was intending to land in nine minutes time .
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Original:  The goal gave the Stars a 4-games-to-2 series win, and they advance to the Western Conference Finals, where they'll face the Detroit Red Wings           
Revised:  The goal gave the Stars a 4-games-to-2 series win, and they advance to the Western Conference Finals, where they'll face the Detroit Red Wings . 
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Original: The Eastern Conference Finals, meanwhile, is an all-Pennsylvania matchup, as the Pittsburgh Penguins  face off against the  Philadelphia Flyers.
Revised: The Eastern Conference Finals, meanwhile, is an all-Pennsylvania matchup, as the Pittsburgh Penguins face off against the rival Philadelphia Flyers.
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Original:  Game 1 will be held at Mellon Arena in Pittsburgh on Friday  
Revised:  Game 1 will be held at Mellon Arena in Pittsburgh on Friday . 
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Original:  The transit operator's major union, the Amalgamated Transit Union  , reneged on an earlier promise to give 48 hours notice before taking strike action.
Revised:  The transit operator's major union, Amalgamated Transit Union , reneged on an earlier promise to give 48 hours notice before taking strike action.
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Original:  If this is passed on Sunday, Toronto's transit service would likely resume for the Monday morning rush hour  
Revised:  If this is passed on Sunday, Toronto's transit service would likely resume for the Monday morning rush hour . 
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Original:  If this is passed on Sunday, Toronto's transit service would likely resume for the Monday morning rush hour .
Revised:  If this is passed on Sunday, Toronto's transit service would likely resume for the Monday morning rush hour 
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Original:  Further reading Toronto transit observer Steve Munro: "Is Local 113 Out Of Its Mind?
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Original:  "I want to pledge on behalf of the British Government that we will work with the whole international community to make sure that food aid is available to the people of Burma.    
Revised:  "I want to pledge on behalf of the British Government that we will work with the whole international community to make sure that food aid is available to the people of Burma. " 
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Original:   "I believe nearly a million people are now in need of food aid and we will have to help the families of those where people have died," he said.
Revised:  Gordon Brown "I believe nearly a million people are now in need of food aid and we will have to help the families of those where people have died," he said.
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Original:  In 2007, Witthoft said he "would keep wearing it as long as I could get it over [his] head."
Revised:  In 2007, Witthoft said he "would keep wearing it as long as he could get it over [his] head."
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Original:  In 2007, Witthoft said he "would keep wearing it as long as he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% could get it over his%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% head."
Revised:  In 2007, Witthoft said he "would keep wearing it as long as %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% could get it over his%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% head."
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Original:  In 2007, Witthoft said he "would keep wearing it as long as he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% could get it over his%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% head."
Revised:  In 2007, Witthoft said he "would keep wearing it as long as he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% his%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% head."
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Original:  In 2007, Witthoft said he "would keep wearing it as long as he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% could get it over his%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% head."
Revised:  In 2007, Witthoft said he "would keep wearing it as long as he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% could get it over %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% head."
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Original:  The Ridgefield, Connecticut boy, 12, wore the No. 4 jersey every day since receiving it as a gift for Christmas in 2003.
Revised:  The Ridgefield, Connecticut boy, 12, wore the No. 4 jersey every day after receiving it as a gift for Christmas in 2003.
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Original: Armed police with Scotland Yard killed a man in a gunfight on Kings Road in the centre of London, England.
Revised: Armed police with Scotland Yard killed a man in a gunfight on Kings Road in London, England.
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Original: Police arrived at the scene at about 4:50 p.m. local time  after receiving reports of gun shots  in the area in Chelsea in the west of the capital.
Revised: Police arrived at the scene at about 4:50 p.m. local time , after receiving reports of gun shots in the area in Chelsea in the west of the capital.
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Original:  Trained negotiators are on sceneand so far no one has been taken into custody  
Revised:  Trained negotiators are on sceneand so far no one has been taken into custody . 
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Original:  It remains unclear weather anybody else was in the house at the time and so far no one has been taken into custody.
Revised:  It remains unclear whether anybody else was in the house at the time and so far no one has been taken into custody.
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Original:  It remains unclear whether anybody else was in the house at the time and so far no one has been taken into custody.
Revised:  It remains unclear whether anybody else was in the house at the time 
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Original:  The IPCC have announced that the death will be investigate
Revised:  but no demands had been made
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Original: Armed police with Scotland Yard killed a man in a gunfight on Kings Road in London, England.
Revised: Armed police with Scotland Yard lawyer a man in a gunfight on Kings Road in London, England.
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Original:  Shortly after arriving, police were shot at by Mark Saunders, 32. Although negotiators were on  scene, the police were shot at a further two times before raiding the house at 9:43 with flashbangs and killing the Mr Saunders.
Revised:  Shortly after arriving, police were shot at by Mark Saunders, 32. Although negotiators were on the scene, the police were shot at a further two times before raiding the house at 9:43 with flashbangs and killing the Mr Saunders.
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Original:  Its believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife , Elizabeth Clarke, 40 ( also a lawyer ) to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
Revised:  It is believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife , Elizabeth Clarke, 40 ( also a lawyer ) to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
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Original:  Its believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife , Elizabeth Clarke, 40 ( also a lawyer ) to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
Revised:  Its believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife Elizabeth Clarke, 40 ( also a lawyer ) to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
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Original:  Its believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife , Elizabeth Clarke, 40 ( also a lawyer ) to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
Revised:  Its believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife , Elizabeth Clarke, also a lawyer ) to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
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Original:  Its believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife , Elizabeth Clarke, 40 ( also a lawyer ) to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
Revised:  Its believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife , Elizabeth Clarke, 40 ( also a lawyer , to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
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Original:  It is believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife Elizabeth Clarke, also a lawyer, to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
Revised:  It is believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife Elizabeth Clarke, a chicken, whom he had been married for a year and a half.
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Original:  It is believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife Elizabeth Clarke, also a lawyer, to whom he had been married for a year and a half.
Revised:  It is believed the cause of the incident was an argument with his recently separated wife Elizabeth Clarke, also a lawyer, to whom he had Kentucky-fried for a year and a half.
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Original:  whereas Clinton has claimed 34\% of the vote in North Carolina . Candidate Confirmed delegates Estimated gains New total Barack Obama 1,310 42 1,352 / 1,627 Hillary Clinton 1,245 35 1,280 / 1,62
Revised:  whereas Clinton has claimed 34\% of the vote in North Carolina Candidate Confirmed delegates Estimated gains New total Barack Obama 1,310 42 1,352 / 1,627 Hillary Clinton 1,245 35 1,280 / 1,62
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Original:  whereas Clinton has claimed 34\% of the vote in North Carolina . Candidate Confirmed delegates Estimated gains New total Barack Obama 1,310 42 1,352 / 1,627 Hillary Clinton 1,245 35 1,280 / 1,62
Revised:  whereas Clinton has claimed 34\% of the vote in North Carolina . 
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Original:  Puerto Rico also gets to cast its votes on June 1, 2008.
Revised:  Puerto Rico also gets to cast its votes on June 1, 
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Original:  Obama said that the party would not be "inalterably divided" noting that pundits are saying that " Sen. Clinton's supporters will not support me, and that my supporters will not support her." "I'm here tonight to tell you that I don't believe it.
Revised:  Obama said that the party would not be "inalterably divided" noting that pundits are saying that " Senator Clinton's supporters will not support me, and that my supporters will not support her." "I'm here tonight to tell you that I don't believe it.
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Original:  This election is about you -- the American people -- and whether we will have a president and a party that can lead us toward a brighter future."
Revised:  This election is about you — the American people -- and whether we will have a president and a party that can lead us toward a brighter future."
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Original:  This election is about you -- the American people -- and whether we will have a president and a party that can lead us toward a brighter future."
Revised:  This election is about you -- the American people — and whether we will have a president and a party that can lead us toward a brighter future."
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Original: Silvio Berlusconi  , 71, accepted the office of Italian Prime Minister, after two days of "consultations" led by the President of the Italian Republic Giorgio Napolitano.
Revised: Silvio Berlusconi Silvio Berlusconi , 71, accepted the office of Italian Prime Minister, after two days of "consultations" led by the President of the Italian Republic Giorgio Napolitano.
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Original:  During a press conference, shortly after the talks with Napolitano, Berlusconi presented his cabinet: there will be 21 ministers, included four women.
Revised:  During a press conference, shortly after the talks with Napolitano, Berlusconi presented his cabinet: there will be 21 ministers, including four women.
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Original:  For Berlusconi, this will be the fourth term of office: according to Donato Marra, secretary-general of the Presidency, Berlusconi and his cabinet will be sworn tomorrow at 17.
Revised:  This will be Berlusconi's fourth term in office. According to Donato Marra, secretary-general of the Presidency, Berlusconi and his cabinet will be sworn tomorrow at 17.
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Original:  Later in the evening, Berlusconi is planning  the first Council of Minister
Revised:  Later in the evening, Berlusconi is planning to announce the first Council of Minister
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Original:  Later in the evening, Berlusconi is planning  the first Council of Minister
Revised:  Later in the evening, Berlusconi is planning the first Council of Ministers
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Original: Silvio Berlusconi Silvio Berlusconi , 71, accepted the office of Italian Prime Minister, after two days of "consultations" led by the President of the Italian Republic Giorgio Napolitano.
Revised: Silvio Berlusconi , 71, accepted the office of Italian Prime Minister, after two days of "consultations" led by the President of the Italian Republic Giorgio Napolitano.
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Original: Silvio Berlusconi, 71, accepted the office of Italian Prime Minister, after two days of "consultations " led by the President of the Italian Republic Giorgio Napolitano.
Revised: Silvio Berlusconi, 71, accepted the office of Italian Prime Minister, after two days of consultations led by the President of the Italian Republic Giorgio Napolitano.
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Original:  According to Donato Marra, secretary-general of the Presidency , Berlusconi and his cabinet will be sworn in tomorrow at 5:00 pm.
Revised:  According to Donato Marra, secretary-general of the presidency , Berlusconi and his cabinet will be sworn in tomorrow at 5:00 pm.
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Original:  The items retrieved are said to be a piece of one of the seats and a fragment of the cargo stowage area  [  
Revised:  The items retrieved are said to be a piece of one of the seats and a fragment of the cargo stowage area . [ 
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Original:  Hodges' wife and son have flown to Brazil to be present during the rescue operation  
Revised:  Hodges' wife and son have flown to Brazil to be present during the rescue operation . 
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Original: On May 6, 2008 the DEA raided several dorms, homes and apartments in connection with a drug operation that focused on San Diego University campus.
Revised: On May 6, 2008 the Drug Enforcement Administration (DEA) raided several dorms, homes and apartments in connection with a drug operation that focused on San Diego University campus.
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Original:  Several Theta Chi members have been arrested for possesion and intent to distribute.
Revised:  Several Theta Chi members have been arrested for possession and intent to distribute.
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Original:  In a press release the DEA states that a member of Theta Chi sent out a mass text message to his "faithful customers" stating that he and his "associates" would be unable to sell cocaine while they were in Las Vegas  for a fraternity formal, according to the Drug Enforcement Administration .
Revised:  In a press release the DEA states that a member of Theta Chi sent out a mass text message to his "faithful customers" stating that he and his "associates" would be unable to sell cocaine while they were in Las Vegas , Nevada for a fraternity formal, according to the Drug Enforcement Administration .
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Original:  In a press release the DEA states that a member of Theta Chi sent out a mass text message to his "faithful customers" stating that he and his "associates" would be unable to sell cocaine while they were in Las Vegas  for a fraternity formal, according to the Drug Enforcement Administration .
Revised:  In a press release the DEA states that a member of Theta Chi sent out a mass text message to his "faithful customers" stating that he and his "associates" would be unable to sell cocaine while they were in Las Vegas for a fraternity formal, according to the DEA .
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Original:   The DEA made over 100 drug purchases through this operation before its May 6th raid.
Revised:  " The DEA made over 100 drug purchases through this operation before its May 6th raid.
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Original: November, 16, 2004, Copenhagen, Denmark- Mr Bill Gates, founder and current Chairman and Chief Software Architect of Microsoft, has said the future operating system of Microsoft called Longhorn will be released in 2006, during a technological conference in Copenhagen, Denmark.
Revised: November, 16, 2004, Copenhagen, Denmark - At a technological conference Mr Bill Gates, founder and current Chairman and Chief Software Architect of Microsoft, has said the future operating system of Microsoft called Longhorn will be released in 2006, during a technological conference in Copenhagen, Denmark.
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Original: November, 16, 2004, Copenhagen, Denmark- Mr Bill Gates, founder and current Chairman and Chief Software Architect of Microsoft, has said the future operating system of Microsoft called Longhorn will be released in 2006, during a technological conference in Copenhagen, Denmark.
Revised: November, 16, 2004, Copenhagen, Denmark- Mr Bill Gates, founder and current Chairman and Chief Software Architect of Microsoft, has said the future operating system of Microsoft called Longhorn will be released in 2006.
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Original: November, 16, 2004, Copenhagen, Denmark - At a technological conference Mr Bill Gates, founder and current Chairman and Chief Software Architect of Microsoft, has said the future operating system of Microsoft called Longhorn will be released in 2006.
Revised: November, 16, 2004, Copenhagen, Denmark - At a technological conference Bill Gates, founder and current Chairman and Chief Software Architect of Microsoft, has said the future operating system of Microsoft called Longhorn will be released in 2006.
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Original: November, 16, 2004, Copenhagen, Denmark - At Microsoft IT Forum 2004 Copenhagen technological conference Bill Gates, founder and current Chairman and Chief Software Architect of Microsoft, has said the future operating system of Microsoft called Longhorn will be released in 2006.
Revised:  At Microsoft IT Forum 2004 Copenhagen technological conference Bill Gates, founder and current Chairman and Chief Software Architect of Microsoft, has said the future operating system of Microsoft called Longhorn will be released in 2006.
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Original: Early media reports on Thursday indicate experts are predicting a massive blizzard to hit the northeastern United States late Thursday evening.
Revised: Early media reports today indicate experts are predicting a massive blizzard to hit the northeastern United States late Thursday evening.
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Original:  Such storms, coloquially called " Nor'easters ", often wreak havoc across cities and smaller towns.
Revised:  Such storms, coloquially called " ", often wreak havoc across cities and smaller towns.
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Original:  The city of New York came under a winter storm warning late Wednesday evening, with 9 inches of snow predicted to fall
Revised:  The city of New York came under a winter storm warning late Wednesday evening, with nine inches of snow predicted to fall
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Original:  The storm itself may ultimately stretch across 22 states, potentially effecting  one-third of the country's population.
Revised:  The storm itself may ultimately stretch across 22 states, potentially effecting about one-third of the country's population.
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Original: The flag of the United NaitionsAid from the United Nations has started to reach Myanmar after a recent cyclone in the region killed thousands.
Revised: Aid from the United Nations has started to reach Myanmar after a recent cyclone in the region killed thousands.
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Original:  Only once the rescue workers reached the most hard hit areas of the storm did they begin to realize the  damage that had taken place .
Revised:  Only once rescue workers reached the most hard hit areas of the storm did they begin to realize the damage that had taken place .
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Original:  Only once the rescue workers reached the most hard hit areas of the storm did they begin to realize the  damage that had taken place .
Revised:  Only once the rescue workers reached the hardest hit areas of the storm did they begin to realize the damage that had taken place .
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Original:  Only once the rescue workers reached the most hard hit areas of the storm did they begin to realize the  damage that had taken place .
Revised:  Only once the rescue workers reached the most hard hit areas of the storm did they begin to realize the extent of damage that had taken place .
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Original:  Only once the rescue workers reached the most hard hit areas of the storm did they begin to realize the  damage that had taken place .
Revised:  Only once the rescue workers reached the most hard hit areas of the storm did they begin to realize the damage that had occurred .
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