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Original: Women One of the earliest women to sign her articles in the Arabic-language press was the female medical practitioner Galila Tamarhan, who contributed articles to the medical magazine Ya` asub al-Tibb (Leader in Medicine) in the 1860s.
Revised: Women One of the earliest women to sign her articles in the Arabic-language press was the female medical practitioner Galila Tamarhan, who contributed articles to the medical magazine Ya` sub al-Tibb (Leader in Medicine) in the 1860s.
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Original: Women One of the earliest women to sign her articles in the Arabic-language press was the female medical practitioner Galila Tamarhan, who contributed articles to the medical magazine Ya ` sub al-Tibb (Leader in Medicine) in the 1860s.
Revised: Women One of the earliest women to sign her articles in the Arabic-language press was the female medical practitioner Galila Tamarhan, who contributed articles to the medical magazine Ya ' sub al-Tibb (Leader in Medicine) in the 1860s.
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Original:  In 1870, Butrus al-Bustani founded Al-Jinan, the first important example of the kind of literary and scientific periodicals which began to appear in the 1870s in Arabic alongside the independent political newspapers.
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Original:  These organizations collect clothes and donate them to the poor beyond their country's borders or re-sell them in brick and mortar retail shops as a fundraising strategy.
Revised:  These organizations collect clothes and sell them to the poor beyond their country's borders or re-sell them in brick and mortar retail shops as a fundraising strategy.
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Original: Charity organizations & resale retail businesses Charity organizations, like the Salvation Army, Goodwill, and Oxfam, are the largest contributors to the secondhand and pre-owned clothing categories.
Revised: Charity organizations & resale retail businesses Charity organizations, like the Salvation Army, Goodwill, and Oxfam, are the largest contributors to the secondhand and pre-owned 
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Original: During Europe ’ s colonial days, second-hand garments were exported to the colonies and, locally, charity shops catering for the poor sprang up.
Revised: During Europe ' s colonial days, second-hand garments were exported to the colonies and, locally, charity shops catering for the poor sprang up.
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Original:  The largest exporters of used clothing are the USA , followed by the UK, Germany and the Netherlands.
Revised:  The largest exporters of used clothing are the US , followed by the UK, Germany and the Netherlands.
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Original: Charity organizations  resale retail businesses Charity organizations, like the Salvation Army, Goodwill, and Oxfam, are the largest contributors to the secondhand and pre-owned clothing categories.
Revised: Charity organizations and resale retail businesses Charity organizations, like the Salvation Army, Goodwill, and Oxfam, are the largest contributors to the secondhand and pre-owned clothing categories.
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Original:  The world largest importers of used clothing are Sub Saharan countries, receiving over 25\% of global second-hand clothing exports.
Revised:  The world largest importers of used clothing are Sub-Saharan countries, receiving over 25\% of global second-hand clothing exports.
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Original:  The cycle of 2nd hand clothing seems to be perpetual and lucrative.
Revised:  The cycle of second hand clothing seems to be perpetual and lucrative.
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Original:  During Europe's colonial days, second-hand garments were exported to the colonies and , locally, charity shops catering for the poor sprang up.
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Original:  Other countries like Pakistan, Uganda or South Africa, which have a flourishing Textile Industry , have limited or no restrictions.
Revised:  Other countries like Pakistan, Uganda or South Africa, which have a flourishing textile industry , have limited or no restrictions.
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Original: John Kay was associated with the invention in 1767 of the spinning frame  , which marked an important stage in the development of textile manufacturing during the Industrial Revolution.
Revised: John Kay was an English inventor best known for the development of the spinning frame , which marked an important stage in the development of textile manufacturing during the Industrial Revolution.
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Original: John Kay's essay on the two John Kays of the industrial revolution: The character of this relationship, and in particular, the competing claims of Arkwright, Kay, and also Highs to primacy as inventors, were subsequently to become the subjects of bitter legal dispute (see below)  .
Revised: John Kay's essay on the two John Kays of the industrial revolution: The character of this relationship, and in particular, the competing claims of Arkwright, Kay, and also Highs to primacy as inventors, were subsequently to become the subjects of bitter legal dispute (see below) ) .
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Original:   In 1768 Arkwright brought Kay the town of Preston to develop a further prototype.
Revised:  () In 1768 Arkwright brought Kay the town of Preston to develop a further prototype.
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Original: : "with the co-operation of a friend of Arkwright, Mr. John Smalley, described as a 'liquor merchant and painter,' the machine was constructed and set up in the parlour of the house belonging to the Free Grammar School." 
Revised: : "with the co-operation of a friend of Arkwright, Mr. John Smalley, described as a 'liquor merchant and painter,' the machine was constructed and set up in the parlour of the house belonging to the Free Grammar School." ()
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Original: John Kay's essay on the two John Kays of the industrial revolution: The character of this relationship, and in particular, the competing claims of Arkwright, Kay, and also Highs to primacy as inventors, were subsequently to become the subjects of bitter legal dispute (see below) ) . Arkwright initially engaged Kay to manufacture brass wheels, ostensibly for use in a perpetual motion machine.
Revised: John Kay's essay on the two John Kays of the industrial revolution: The character of this relationship, and in particular, the competing claims of Arkwright, Kay, and also Highs to primacy as inventors, were subsequently to become the subjects of bitter legal dispute (see below) . Arkwright initially engaged Kay to manufacture brass wheels, ostensibly for use in a perpetual motion machine.
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Original:  () In 1768 Arkwright brought Kay the town of Preston to develop a further prototype.
Revised:  In 1768 Arkwright brought Kay the town of Preston to develop a further prototype.
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Original: : "with the co-operation of a friend of Arkwright, Mr. John Smalley, described as a 'liquor merchant and painter,' the machine was constructed and set up in the parlour of the house belonging to the Free Grammar School." ()
Revised: : "with the co-operation of a friend of Arkwright, Mr. John Smalley, described as a 'liquor merchant and painter,' the machine was constructed and set up in the parlour of the house belonging to the Free Grammar School." 
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Original: Mutunga attended Ithookwe Primary School before proceeding to Kitui School for his Kenya Certificate of Education exams .
Revised: Mutunga attended Ithookwe Primary School before proceeding to Kitui School for his Kenya Certificate of Education exams 
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Original: Mutunga attended Ithookwe Primary School before proceeding to Kitui School for his Kenya Certificate of Education exams  He was the first student to score six points in the exams (an "A" in all subjects), earning him a place at the Strathmore College for his "A" levels.
Revised: Mutunga attended Ithookwe Primary School before proceeding to Kitui School for his Kenya Certificate of Education exams . He was the first student to score six points in the exams (an "A" in all subjects), earning him a place at the Strathmore College for his "A" levels.
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Original:  Appointed as music academic adviser for Music LifeStyle Academy,  Singapore.
Revised:  Appointed as music academic advisor for Music LifeStyle Academy, Singapore.
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Original: Ayke Agus (born 1949) is an Indonesian classical Violinist and Pianist , known primarily through her longtime collaboration with the violinist Jascha Heifetz.
Revised: Ayke Agus (born 1949) is an Indonesian classical violinist and pianist , known primarily through her longtime collaboration with the violinist Jascha Heifetz.
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Original: Early life  A native of Indonesia, of Chinese, Dutch and Javanese ancestry, Agus was recognized as a child prodigy at the age of 7 on violin and piano.
Revised: Early life ? A native of Indonesia, of Chinese, Dutch and Javanese ancestry, Agus was recognized as a child prodigy at the age of 7 on violin and piano.
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Original: List of individuals killed under torture in Bahrain The table below shows the names of Bahrainis who are thought to have died under torture of state security officers.
Revised: List of individuals killed under torture in Bahrain The table below shows the names of some Bahrainis who have died under torture of state security officers.
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Original: List of individuals killed under torture in Bahrain The table below shows the names of Bahrainis who are thought to have died under torture of state security officers.
Revised: List of individuals killed under torture in Bahrain The table below shows the names of Bahrainis who are thought to have died under torture of regime security officers.
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Original:  Following his predecessors Joseph Rutski and Rafajil Korsak, Sielava went on in negotiations with the Orthodox Patriarch of Kiev, Peter Mogila about the way to unify the Ruthenian Church.
Revised:  Following his predecessors Joseph Rutski and Rafajil Korsak, Sielava went on in negotiations with the Orthodox Patriarch of Kiev, Peter Mogila about the way to unify the Ukrainian Church.
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Original:  Angiotensin II constricts blood vessels, increases fluid reabsorption in the kidneys, and stimulates the adrenal cortex to synthesize and secrete aldosterone, which increases fluid reabsorption in the kidneys.
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Original:  Due to low local blood flow, the kidneys mistakenly increases blood pressure of the entire circulatory system.
Revised:  Due to low local blood flow, the kidneys mistakenly increase blood pressure of the entire circulatory system.
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Original: Renovascular hypertension (or "renal hypertension") is a condition in which high blood pressure is caused by the kidneys' hormonal response to narrowing of the arteries supplying the kidneys.
Revised: Renovascular hypertension is a condition in which high blood pressure is caused by the kidneys' hormonal response to narrowing of the arteries supplying the kidneys.
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Original: Prognosis Prognosis of individuals with renovascular hypertension is not easy to determine.
Revised: Prognosis The prognosis of individuals with renovascular hypertension is not easy to determine.
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Original:  Those with atherosclerotic renal artery disease have a high risk of mortality, furthermore  those who also have renal dysfunction have a higher mortality risk.
Revised:  Those with atherosclerotic renal artery disease have a high risk of mortality, furthermore , those who also have renal dysfunction have a higher mortality risk.
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Original:  Eventually she secretly conspired against him with the help of Mir Jafar, the chief of Alivardi Khan's army, along with the merchants Umi Chand and Jagat Seth.
Revised:  Eventually she secretly conspired against him with the help of Mir Jafar, the chief of Alivardi Khan's army, along with the merchants Omi Chand and Jagat Seth.
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Original: Dog Island is a small island, situated on the Gambia River in the Republic of The Gambia about 13 kilometers from the mouth of the river to the Atlantic Ocean.
Revised: Dog Island is a small island, situated on the Gambia River in the Republic of The Gambia about 13 kilometres from the mouth of the river to the Atlantic Ocean.
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Original:  During low tide the island is connected to the mainland, but during high tide it is separated by about 150 meters from the headland of Dog Island Point on the north bank of the river.
Revised:  During low tide the island is connected to the mainland, but during high tide it is separated by about 150 metres from the headland of Dog Island Point on the north bank of the river.
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Original: Dog Island is a small island, situated on the Gambia River in the Republic of The Gambia about 13 kilometres from the mouth of the river to the Atlantic Ocean.
Revised: Dog Island is a small island, situated on the Gambia River in the Republic of the Gambia about 13 kilometres from the mouth of the river to the Atlantic Ocean.
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Original: The first European known to land on the island was Alvise Cadamosto, a Venetian captain in the service of the Portuguese Prince Henry the Navigator in 1456, who named the island Ilha de Santo André, on account of a deceased crew member named " Andrea " who they buried there.
Revised: The first European known to land on the island was Alvise Cadamosto, a Venetian captain in the service of the Portuguese Prince Henry the Navigator in 1456, who named the island Ilha de Santo André, on account of a deceased crew member named " André " who they buried there.
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Original:   "Original Journals of the Voyages of Cada Mosto and Piedro de Cintra to the Coast of Africa, the former in the years 1455 and 1456, and the latter soon afterwards", as reprinted in R. Kerr, 1811, A General History of Voyages and Travels to the end of the 18th century, vol. 2, Edinburgh: Blackwood, p.248 (In 1651, colonists from the Duchy of Courland built a fort a little upriver on what is now called Kunta Kinteh Island and was then called "St.
Revised:  <ref> "Original Journals of the Voyages of Cada Mosto and Piedro de Cintra to the Coast of Africa, the former in the years 1455 and 1456, and the latter soon afterwards", as reprinted in R. Kerr, 1811, A General History of Voyages and Travels to the end of the 18th century, vol. 2, Edinburgh: Blackwood, p.248 (In 1651, colonists from the Duchy of Courland built a fort a little upriver on what is now called Kunta Kinteh Island and was then called "St.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Currently, tourists are occasionally ferried from Banjul to Dog Island to observe the dolphins swimming in the Gambia River estuary.
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Original:  their effects are confined mainly to sub-atomic length scales.
Revised:  their effects are confined mainly to sus-atomic length scales.
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Original: Etymology The word universe derives from the Old French word univers , which in turn derives from the Latin word universum .
Revised: Etymology The word universe derives from the Old French word , which in turn derives from the Latin word universum .
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Original: Etymology The word universe derives from the Old French word univers , which in turn derives from the Latin word universum .
Revised: Etymology The word universe derives from the Old French word univers , which in turn derives from the Latin word .
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Original:  Synonyms A term for "universe " among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was  , tò pân ("the all"), defined as all matter and all space, and  , tò hólon ("all things"), which did not necessarily include the void.
Revised:  Synonyms A term for universe among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was , tò pân ("the all"), defined as all matter and all space, and , tò hólon ("all things"), which did not necessarily include the void.
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Original:  Synonyms A term for "universe " among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was  , tò pân ("the all"), defined as all matter and all space, and  , tò hólon ("all things"), which did not necessarily include the void.
Revised:  Synonyms A term for "universe " among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was () 'the all' , tò pân ("the all"), defined as all matter and all space, and , tò hólon ("all things"), which did not necessarily include the void.
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Original:  Synonyms A term for "universe " among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was  , tò pân ("the all"), defined as all matter and all space, and  , tò hólon ("all things"), which did not necessarily include the void.
Revised:  Synonyms A term for "universe " among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was , defined as all matter and all space, and , tò hólon ("all things"), which did not necessarily include the void.
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Original:  Synonyms A term for "universe " among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was  , tò pân ("the all"), defined as all matter and all space, and  , tò hólon ("all things"), which did not necessarily include the void.
Revised:  Synonyms A term for "universe " among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was , tò pân ("the all"), defined as all matter and all space, and () 'all things' , tò hólon ("all things"), which did not necessarily include the void.
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Original:  Synonyms A term for "universe " among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was  , tò pân ("the all"), defined as all matter and all space, and  , tò hólon ("all things"), which did not necessarily include the void.
Revised:  Synonyms A term for "universe " among the ancient Greek philosophers from Pythagoras onwards was , tò pân ("the all"), defined as all matter and all space, and , which did not necessarily include the void.
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Original:  Another synonym was , ho kósmos (meaning the world, the cosmos ) . Synonyms are also found in Latin authors ( totum, mundus, natura ) and survive in modern languages, e.g., the German words Das All, Weltall, and Natur for universe.
Revised:  Another synonym was () meaning ' the world, the cosmos ) . Synonyms are also found in Latin authors ( totum, mundus, natura ) and survive in modern languages, e.g., the German words Das All, Weltall, and Natur for universe.
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Original:  Another synonym was , ho kósmos (meaning the world, the cosmos ) . Synonyms are also found in Latin authors ( totum, mundus, natura ) and survive in modern languages, e.g., the German words Das All, Weltall, and Natur for universe.
Revised:  Another synonym was , ho kósmos (meaning the world, the cosmos ' . Synonyms are also found in Latin authors ( totum, mundus, natura ) and survive in modern languages, e.g., the German words Das All, Weltall, and Natur for universe.
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Original:  Another synonym was , ho kósmos (meaning the world, the cosmos ) . Synonyms are also found in Latin authors ( totum, mundus, natura ) and survive in modern languages, e.g., the German words Das All, Weltall, and Natur for universe.
Revised:  Another synonym was , ho kósmos (meaning the world, the cosmos ) . Synonyms are also found in Latin authors ( , , ) and survive in modern languages, e.g., the German words Das All, Weltall, and Natur for universe.
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Original:  Another synonym was , ho kósmos (meaning the world, the cosmos ) . Synonyms are also found in Latin authors ( totum, mundus, natura ) and survive in modern languages, e.g., the German words Das All, Weltall, and Natur for universe.
Revised:  Another synonym was , ho kósmos (meaning the world, the cosmos ) . Synonyms are also found in Latin authors ( totum, mundus, natura ) and survive in modern languages, e.g., the German words , , and for universe.
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Original:  Many of the stars in  galaxy have planets.
Revised:  Many of the stars in a galaxy have planets.
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Original:  According to estimation of this theory, space and time emerged together ago, and the universe has been expanding ever since.
Revised:  According to this theory, space and time emerged together ago, and the universe has been expanding ever since.
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Original:  The model is based on general relativity and on simplifying assumptions such as  homogeneity and isotropy of space.
Revised:  The model is based on general relativity and on simplifying assumptions such as the homogeneity and isotropy of space.
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Original: Kwabotwe is just one of the numerous awe-inspiring hills in Ghana, but it the only hill that attracts scholars and not tourists.
Revised: Kwabotwe is a hill in Ghana. However, it is the only hill that attracts scholars and not tourists.
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Original:   By the early nineteenth century, Europeans had settled the coastal regions of Ghana, particularly Cape Coast, where they could build their castles to serve as a home base.
Revised:  History By the early nineteenth century, Europeans had settled the coastal regions of Ghana, particularly Cape Coast, where they could build their castles to serve as a home base.
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Original:  When in 1876, a group of British missionaries of the Methodist church thought of a location to educate young Ghanaians not only to read and write, but to develop their intellectual capacities, they looked up this hill, Kwabotwe, to establish the first secondary school in Ghana.
Revised:  secondary schools in Ghana.
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Original:  The Kwabotwe hill, on which Mfantsipim stands today, was a gift from the Aborigines Society which was taken from part of the estate bequeathed in perpetuity to the Society by Kwa Botwe, alias Jacob Wilson Sey, the first President of the Aborigines Society.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links "The School" by MOBA 76, retrieved November 17, 2005
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Original:  It is the location of Mfantsipim, one of the oldest secondary schools in Ghana.
Revised:  It is the location of Mfantsipim, the oldest secondary schools in Ghana.
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Original:  He's the current Speaker Elect of the 11th Parliament after defeating the former Speaker Hon.
Revised:  He's the current Speaker of the 11th Parliament after defeating the former Speaker Hon.
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Original: RT. Hon. Dr. Jacob L. Oulanyah is a Ugandan agricultural economist, lawyer and politician, who has been the Deputy Speaker of the Ugandan parliament since 19th May 2011.
Revised: RT. Hon. Dr. Jacob L. Oulanyah is a Ugandan agricultural economist, lawyer and politician, who serves as the Speaker of the Ugandan parliament since 19th May 2011.
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Original:  He's the current Speaker of the 11th Parliament  after defeating the former Speaker Hon.
Revised:  He's the current Speaker of the 11th Parliament after defeating the former Speaker 
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Original:  In the vote, conducted by secret ballot, he received 300 votes, while Mohammed Nsereko received 115.
Revised:  In the vote, conducted by secret ballot, he received 300 votes, while Muhammad Nsereko received 115.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cheik El Hasnaoui website Category:1910 births Category:2002 deaths Category:Algerian male singers Category:Kabyle peop
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cheik El Hasnaoui website Category:1910 births Category:2002 deaths Category:Algerian male singers Category:Kabyle peop
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cheik El Hasnaoui website Category:1910 births Category:2002 deaths Category:Algerian male singers Category:Kabyle peop
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:1910 births Category:2002 deaths Category:Algerian male singers Category:Kabyle peop
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