wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: right Microsoft has launched it's much hyped Xbox 360 console into Japan, but unlike the European and American markets the Japanese are not rushing out to buy them.
Revised: right Microsoft has launched its much-hyped Xbox 360 console into Japan, but unlike the European and American markets the Japanese are not rushing out to buy them.
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Original:  In Japan, reports say that fewer than 50 units were sold in the first 2 hours of it's release.
Revised:  In Japan, reports say that fewer than 50 units were sold in the first 2 hours of its release.
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Original:  In Japan, reports say that fewer than 50 units were sold in the first 2 hours of its release.
Revised:  In Japan, sales are much lower. One store-owner says that fewer than 50 units were sold in the first 2 hours of its release.
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Original:  The first generation of Xbox consoles performed similarly despite being released two years before Sony's PlayStation 2.
Revised:  The first generation of Xbox consoles performed similarly possibly due to being released two years before Sony's PlayStation 2.
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Original:  The first generation of Xbox consoles performed similarly despite being released two years before Sony's PlayStation 2.
Revised:  The first generation of Xbox consoles performed similarly despite being released two years after the PlayStation 2.
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Original: Many believe that in Japan it is difficult for any games console to be successful that doesn't wear the Sony or Nintendo name .
Revised: Many believe that in Japan it is difficult for any games console to be successful that isn't from a Japanese company, such as Sony or Nintendo name .
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Original: Many believe that in Japan it is difficult for any games console to be successful that doesn't wear the Sony or Nintendo name .
Revised: Many believe that in Japan it is difficult for any games console to be successful that doesn't wear the Sony or Nintendo .
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Original:  The field goal attempt was unsuccessful, but even if the Chiefs had scored 3 points, it would not have been enough to win the game  
Revised:  The field goal attempt was unsuccessful, but even if the Chiefs had scored 3 points, it would not have been enough to win the game . 
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Original: The win means the Cowboys remain tied with the Minnesota Vikings, who won against the St. Louis Rams  for the sixth and final NFC wildcard spot with 3 games remaining.
Revised: The win means the Cowboys remain tied with the Minnesota Vikings, who won against the St. Louis Rams , for the sixth and final NFC wildcard spot with 3 games remaining.
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Original: The SETI (search for extraterrestrial intelligence) Institute has been shut down since mid-April 2011 due to budget cuts.
Revised: The (search for extraterrestrial intelligence) Institute has been shut down since mid-April 2011 due to budget cuts.
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Original:  Over 2,500 donors, including actress Jodi Foster who popularized SETI in the movie Contact , provided $220,000 to keep the Institute's telescopes functioning.
Revised:  Over 2,500 donors, including actress who popularized SETI in the movie Contact , provided $220,000 to keep the Institute's telescopes functioning.
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Original:  Over 2,500 donors, including actress Jodi Foster who popularized SETI in the movie Contact , provided $220,000 to keep the Institute's telescopes functioning.
Revised:  Over 2,500 donors, including actress Jodi Foster who popularized SETI in the movie , provided $220,000 to keep the Institute's telescopes functioning.
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Original:  As they continue to search for long-term funding, the Institute plans to use the money is has to begin study on several Kepler planets which were discovered by NASA scientists in early February.
Revised:  As they continue to search for long-term funding, the Institute plans to use the money is has to begin study on several planets which were discovered by NASA scientists in early February.
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Original:  As they continue to search for long-term funding, the Institute plans to use the money is has to begin study on several Kepler planets which were discovered by NASA scientists in early February.
Revised:  As they continue to search for long-term funding, the Institute plans to use the money is has to begin study on several Kepler planets which were discovered by scientists in early February.
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Original: The (search for extraterrestrial intelligence) Institute has been shut down since mid-April 2011 due to budget cuts .
Revised: The , shut down since mid-April 2011 due to budget cuts .
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Original: The (search for extraterrestrial intelligence) Institute has been shut down since mid-April 2011 due to budget cuts .
Revised: The (search for extraterrestrial intelligence) Institute has been shut down since mid-April due to budget cuts .
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Original:  However, due to a recent influx of funds to the Institute from several donors , they have announced that they will re-open in mid-September and continue their research .
Revised:  However, due to a recent influx of funds from several donors , they have announced that they will re-open in mid-September and continue their research .
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Original:  However, due to a recent influx of funds to the Institute from several donors , they have announced that they will re-open in mid-September and continue their research .
Revised:  However, due to a recent influx of funds to the Institute from several donors .
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Original:  "We are absolutely thrilled that thousands of people from all over the world stepped forward to declare their support for SETI science just when help was needed the most," said  a press release on SETI's website expressing their thanks to the donors .
Revised:  "We are absolutely thrilled that thousands of people from all over the world stepped forward to declare their support for SETI science just when help was needed the most," said SETI through a press release on SETI's website expressing their thanks to the donors .
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Original:  "We are absolutely thrilled that thousands of people from all over the world stepped forward to declare their support for SETI science just when help was needed the most," said  a press release on SETI's website expressing their thanks to the donors .
Revised:  "We are absolutely thrilled that thousands of people from all over the world stepped forward to declare their support for SETI science just when help was needed the most," said a press release .
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Original:  As they continue to search for long-term funding, the Institute plans to use the money is has to begin study on several planets which were discovered by scientists in early February.
Revised:  As they continue to search for long-term funding, the Institute plans to use the money to study several planets, which were discovered by scientists in early February.
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Original:  These planets are thought to be within a  distance from their corresponding stars to be capable of supporting liquid water and thus potential life
Revised:  These planets are thought to be within a certain distance from their corresponding stars to be capable of supporting liquid water and thus potential life
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Original:  The library is expected to bring in $850 to $1000 million making the Dreamworks net purchase price about $500 to $650 million.
Revised:  The library is expected to bring in 
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Original:  NBC Universal, owned by GE, had offered $    900 million
Revised:  NBC Universal, owned by GE, had offered $ NBC Universal, owned by GE, had offered 900 million
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Original: 200px Chinese security forces have sealed off a village where police have allegedly shot dead up to 20 people, in what has been touted as the most lethal use of force by authorities since the Tiananmen Square massacre.
Revised: 200px Chinese security forces have sealed off a village where police have allegedly shot and killed up to 20 people, in what has been touted as the most lethal use of force by authorities since the Tiananmen Square massacre.
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Original:  Villagers claim  up to 20 people died in the clash.
Revised:  Villagers claim that up to 20 people died in the clash.
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Original: In an apparent attempt to diffuse tensions, authorities have arrested the police commander accused of authorising the shootings.
Revised: Authorities have arrested the police commander accused of authorising the shootings.
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Original: 200px Chinese security forces have sealed off a village where police have allegedly shot and killed up to 20 people, in what has been touted as the most lethal use of force by authorities since the Tiananmen Square massacre.
Revised: 200px Chinese security forces have sealed off a village where police have allegedly fucked and killed up to 20 people, in what has been touted as the most lethal use of force by authorities since the Tiananmen Square massacre.
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Original: 200px Chinese security forces have sealed off a village where police have allegedly shot and killed up to 20 people, in what has been touted as the most lethal use of force by authorities since the Tiananmen Square massacre.
Revised: 200px Chinese security forces have sealed off a village where police have allegedly shot and killed up to 20 people, in what has been touted as the most lethal use of butraping by authorities since the Tiananmen Square massacre.
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Original:  Days after reports of the shooting leaked out, Beijing has confirmed that police had opened fire last Tuesday on villagers protesting against land seizures.
Revised:  Days after reports of the shooting leaked out, Beijing has confirmed that police had opened there flys last Tuesday on villagers protesting against land seizures.
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Original:  Days after reports of the shooting leaked out, Beijing has confirmed that police had opened fire last Tuesday on villagers protesting against land seizures.
Revised:  Days after reports of the shooting leaked out, Beijing has confirmed that police had opened fire last Tuesday on villagers giving head against land seizures.
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Original:  The incident came after months of protest against the building of a power station, which villagers say was on stolen land.
Revised:  The incident came after months of protest against the building of a breothel station, which villagers say was on stolen land.
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Original:  Best Urban/Alternative Performance, "Dirty Harry" Producer Of The Year, Danger Mouse "Demon Days" Best Short Form Music Video, "Feel Good, Inc.  
Revised:  Best Urban/Alternative Performance, "Dirty Harry" Producer Of The Year, Danger Mouse "Demon Days" Best Short Form Music Video, "Feel Good, Inc. " 
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Original:  The company states : 'A cadaveric kidney comes from a dead person and in the majority of cases in China, the dead people are prisoners, which allows for us to know at least two weeks ahead of time when the kidney will be ready.'
Revised:  The company states , 'A cadaveric kidney comes from a dead person and in the majority of cases in China, the dead people are prisoners, which allows for us to know at least two weeks ahead of time when the kidney will be ready.'
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Original: An internet based company, Transplantsinternational.com has begun selling transplants of Kidney's from executed Chinese prisoners, at a price of £23,000.
Revised: An internet based company, Transplantsinternational.com has begun selling transplants of kidneys from executed Chinese prisoners, at a price of £23,000.
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Original:  Mobs ripped out garbage bins, police dogs and helicopters were called as furious locals began to gather, threatening to take back the streets from "wogs and Lebanese".
Revised:  Muslim mobs ripped out garbage bins, police dogs and helicopters were called as furious locals began to gather, threatening to take back the streets from "wogs and Lebanese".
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Original: "Carloads of  men" terrorise eastern suburbs In an escalation of yesterday's conflict, up to 70 cars invaded Cronulla and Brighton-le-Sands on Monday night - following the vicious attacks by Cronulla locals on Sunday.
Revised: "Carloads of men" terrorise eastern suburbs In an escalation of yesterday's conflict, up to 70 cars invaded Cronulla and Brighton-le-Sands on Monday night - following the reported attacks by Cronulla locals on Sunday.
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Original:  This extension also ended a possible move of ex-Chelsea manager José Mourinho from managing the club after being sacked having a poor performance in the .
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Original:  Blanc took the control over the club when Italian joined Real Madrid and helped them complete their tenth European title , La Decima .
Revised:  Blanc took the control over the club when Italian joined Real Madrid and won the title with Los Blancos .
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Original:  Blanc took the control over the club when Italian joined Real Madrid and won the title with Los Blancos .
Revised:  Blanc took the control over the club when Italian joined Real Madrid and won the title with them .
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Original: (PSG) manager  signed a two-year contract extension with the French winners.
Revised: (PSG) manager has signed a two-year contract extension with the French winners.
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Original:  Blanc took the control over the club when Italian joined Real Madrid and won the title with them.
Revised:  Blanc took control of the club when Italian joined Real Madrid and won the title with them.
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Original:  File photo of Laurent Blanc |left Currently, PSG are 24 points ahead of as league toppers, without a single defeat and would face Chelsea F.C. in the round of Last 16.
Revised:  File photo of Laurent Blanc |left Currently, PSG are 24 points ahead of as league toppers, without a single defeat and will face Chelsea F.C. in the round of Last 16.
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Original:  Between 20 and 30 people were arrested in the Paris region early today following an investigation into the funding of Islamist extremists.
Revised:  Between 20 and 30 people were arrested in the Paris region following an investigation into the funding of Islamist extremists.
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Original:  Police described Monday's events as a "major operation aimed at disbanding an Islamist network linked to terrorism" , conducted as part of a probe by France's leading anti-terrorism investigating magistrate .
Revised:  Police described Monday's events as a "major operation aimed at disbanding an Islamist network linked to terrorism" .
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Original:  French police said on Monday they have smashed an Islamist terrorism ring in Paris.
Revised: Paris French police said on Monday they have smashed an Islamist terrorism ring in Paris.
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Original:  French investigators were reportedly "convinced" those arrested intended to stage violent acts on French territory, the radio station reported.
Revised:  French investigators were reportedly "convinced" those arrested intended to stage violent acts on French territory, a French radio station reported.
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Original: A similar penalty attempt by for Arsenal F.C. in 2005 did not work out .
Revised: A similar penalty attempt by for Arsenal F.C. in 2005 did not work out 
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Original: On Monday, US singer won the 58th for her album , and her video song won the Gramm Award for the .
Revised: On Monday, US singer won the 58th for her album , and her video song won the Grammy Award for the .
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Original:  Swift collected three Grammys at this year's awards ceremony: Best music video , Best Pop Vocal album and Album of the year .
Revised:  Swift collected three Grammys at this year's awards ceremony: Best Music Video , Best Pop Vocal album and Album of the year .
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Original:  Swift collected three Grammys at this year's awards ceremony: Best music video , Best Pop Vocal album and Album of the year .
Revised:  Swift collected three Grammys at this year's awards ceremony: Best music video , Best Pop Vocal Album and Album of the year .
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Original:  Swift collected three Grammys at this year's awards ceremony: Best music video , Best Pop Vocal album and Album of the year .
Revised:  Swift collected three Grammys at this year's awards ceremony: Best music video , Best Pop Vocal album and Album of the Year .
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Original:  In the beginning of the award function, Swift made a live performance of her song .
Revised:  At the beginning of the award function, Swift made a live performance of her song .
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Original:  In the beginning of the award function, Swift made a live performance of her song .
Revised:  In the beginning of the award ceremony, Swift performed her song live .
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Original:  The other nominees for the Album of The Year were ' , 's , 's , and 's . Canadian singer The Weeknd won two awards for The Best Urban Contemporary Album and Best R&B performance .
Revised:  The other nominees for the Album of The Year were ' , 's , 's , and 's . Canadian singer The Weeknd won two awards for Best Urban Contemporary Album and Best R&B performance .
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Original:  The other nominees for the Album of The Year were ' , 's , 's , and 's . Canadian singer The Weeknd won two awards for The Best Urban Contemporary Album and Best R&B performance .
Revised:  The other nominees for the Album of The Year were ' , 's , 's , and 's . Canadian singer The Weeknd won two awards for The Best Urban Contemporary Album and Best R&B Performance .
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Original:  BEYONCEÉ STILL HAD ONE OF THE GREATEST VIDEOS OF ALL TIME, OF ALL TIME.
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Original: Yesterday, UK singer won the for his song from his album ahead of 's , feat.
Revised: Yesterday, UK singer won the for his song from his album ahead of 's ;
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Original:  's, 's and 's . Girl Crush won the .
Revised:  's, featuring , ; 's ; and 's . Girl Crush won the .
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Original: Welsh singer had co-written the song.
Revised: Welsh singer co-wrote the song.
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Original:  He also added "This is something you never ever dream of so I'm super grateful for it."
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Original: American singer announced the winner for the Song of the Year, and the envelope was written in Braille script.
Revised: US singer announced the winner for the Song of the Year, and the envelope was written in Braille script.
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Original: Yesterday, UK singer won the for  his song from his album ahead of 's ;
Revised: Yesterday, UK singer won the for for his song from his album ahead of 's ;
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Original:  File photo of The Weeknd He also won the Grammy Award for for his second studio album .
Revised:  File photo of The Weeknd The Weeknd also won the Grammy Award for for his second studio album .
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Original: Last year, won the Award for Best R&B Song for featuring her husband which also belonged to the Fifty Shades of Grey soundtrack .
Revised: Last year, won the Award for Best R&B Song for featuring her husband .
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Original: On Monday, at the 58th ceremony, Canadian singer won his first Grammy Award, , for his song , which was also featured in the 2015 movie , based on ' erotic novel .
Revised: On Monday, at the 58th ceremony, Canadian singer won his first Grammy Award, , for his song , which was also featured in the 2015 movie based on ' erotic novel .
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Original: On Monday, at the 58th ceremony, Canadian singer won his first Grammy Award, , for his song , which was also featured on the soundtrack of the 2015 movie based on '  erotic novel .
Revised: On Monday, at the 58th ceremony, Canadian singer won his first Grammy Award, , for his song , which was also featured on the soundtrack of the 2015 movie based on ' s erotic novel .
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Original:  This awards ceremony marked the first Grammy win for The Weeknd, Justin Bieber and .
Revised:  This awards ceremony marked the first Grammy wins for The Weeknd, Justin Bieber and .
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Original: FC Barcelona football star Lionel Messi became the first player to score 300 goals in La Liga competitions as he scored a brace against in an away match at and his tally reached 301 on Wednesday.
Revised: FC Barcelona football star Lionel Messi became the first player to score 300 goals in La Liga competitions as he scored a against in an away match at and his tally reached 301 on Wednesday.
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Original:  He has scored 173 goals at and 128 goals in away stadium , most against Madrid based club (21).
Revised:  He has scored 173 goals at and 128 goals in away stadia , most against Madrid based club (21).
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Original:  Of his 301 goals, he has scored 240 goals from his left foot, 48 with his right, twelve headers and one with his hand mimicking 's Hand of God .
Revised:  Of his 301 goals, he has scored 240 goals from his left foot, 48 with his right, twelve headers and one with his hand mimicking 's "" .
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Original:  He has scored 173 goals at and 128 goals in away stadia, most against Madrid based club (21).
Revised:  He has scored 173 goals at and 128 goals in away stadia, most against Madrid-based club (21).
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Original:  Of his 301 goals, he has scored 240 goals from his left foot, 48 with his right, twelve headers  and one with his hand mimicking 's "".
Revised:  Of his 301 goals, he has scored 240 goals with his left foot, 48 with his right, twelve headers and one with his hand mimicking 's "".
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Original:  Of his 301 goals, he has scored 240 goals from his left foot, 48 with his right, twelve headers  and one with his hand mimicking 's "".
Revised:  Of his 301 goals, he has scored 240 goals from his left foot, 48 with his right, twelve headers , and one with his hand mimicking 's "".
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Original:  The five-time winner is also the top scorer of the  , and .
Revised:  The five-time winner is also the top scorer of the , , and .
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Original: Eleven years ago , 17-year-old Messi scored his first goal against on May 1, 2005 and took 154 games to reach 100 goals landmark . Last season, he broke the record of who scored 251 goals.
Revised: Eleven years ago on May 1, Messi at the age of 17 scored his first goal against on May 1, 2005 and took 154 games to reach 100 goals landmark . Last season, he broke the record of who scored 251 goals.
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Original: Eleven years ago , 17-year-old Messi scored his first goal against on May 1, 2005 and took 154 games to reach 100 goals landmark . Last season, he broke the record of who scored 251 goals.
Revised: Eleven years ago , 17-year-old Messi scored his first goal against . He reached 100 goals landmark . Last season, he broke the record of who scored 251 goals.
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Original:  He became third player in the top five European leagues to have scored more than 300 goals.
Revised:  He became third player in the top five European leagues to score more than 300 goals.
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Original:  He became  third player in the top five European leagues to score more than 300 goals.
Revised:  He became the third player in the top five European leagues to score more than 300 goals.
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Original: A popular site about Tramlink "Croydon Tramlink - The unoffical site" has withdrawn it's news section in response to legal threats.
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Original:  Concerns about the move have already been expressed on the uk.transport.london newsgroup.
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Original:  The bid reffered to is rumoured to be the supply of light rail vehicles for the tram system in Colgne, Germany.
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