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Original:  Palestinian officials have termed the Israeli attacks " w:massacres| massacres".
Revised:  Palestinian officials have termed the Israeli attacks " massacres".
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Original: Three Hamas fighters, including Luaye al-Burnu, a local official in the Izz al-Din al-Qassam Brigades, were among over 17 dead as a result of Israeli aggression in Gaza.
Revised: Three Hamas fighters, including Luaye al-Burnu, a local official in the Izz al-Din al-Qassam Brigades, were among over 17 dead as a result of Israeli assaults in Gaza.
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Original:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a crowd that had formed in front of a mosque in which the Hamas men had taken refuge .
Revised:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a group which had gathered around a mosque in which the Hamas men had taken refuge .
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Original:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a group which had gathered around a mosque in order to aid the escape of Hamas members within . Hamas leader Ismail Haniya praised the women, but the Israelis said they had served as "human shields" for the resistance militia.
Revised:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a crowd that had formed in front of a mosque in order to aid the escape of Hamas members within . Hamas leader Ismail Haniya praised the women, but the Israelis said they had served as "human shields" for the resistance militia.
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Original:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a group which had gathered around a mosque in order to aid the escape of Hamas members within . Hamas leader Ismail Haniya praised the women, but the Israelis said they had served as "human shields" for the resistance militia.
Revised:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a group which had gathered around a mosque in which the Hamas men had taken refuge . Hamas leader Ismail Haniya praised the women, but the Israelis said they had served as "human shields" for the resistance militia.
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Original:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a crowd that had formed in front of a mosque in which the Hamas men had taken refuge  .
Revised:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a group of woman that formed in front of a mosque in which the Hamas men had taken refuge .
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Original:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a crowd that had formed in front of a mosque in which the Hamas men had taken refuge  .
Revised:  Two women were gunned down by Israeli soldiers who opened fire on a crowd that had formed in front of a mosque where Hamas men had taken refuge .
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Original: The incident occured when the local womenfolk were asked, on radio, to intervene in the tense standoff between the Israeli troops and about 15 Hamas fighters in the mosque.
Revised: The incident occurred when the local womenfolk were asked, on radio, to intervene in the tense standoff between the Israeli troops and about 15 Hamas fighters in the mosque.
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Original:  A spokesman for Israel's military stated that five towns-Beit Hanoun, Beit Lahiya, Jabaliya and Rafah had been targetted .
Revised:  A spokesman for Israel's military stated that five towns-Beit Hanoun, Beit Lahiya, Jabaliya and Rafah had been targeted .
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Original: Mr. Blunkett was the former home secretary in the United Kingdom, until he resigned after it emerged that he had  an affair with Mrs.
Revised: Mr. Blunkett was the former home secretary in the United Kingdom, until he resigned after it emerged that he had had an affair with Mrs.
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Original:  Quinn. The DNA test removes without any doubt that the real father was Stephen Quinn.
Revised:  Quinn. 
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Original: 150px DNA tests have proven that David Blunkett is not the father of Kimberley Quinn's baby son, Lorcan.
Revised:  DNA tests have proven that David Blunkett is not the father of Kimberley Quinn's baby son, Lorcan.
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Original:  The advertising agency, Ogilvy Toronto,  did not originally intend to upload the video to YouTube, only display it on the company's homepage.
Revised:  The advertising agency, Ogilvy Toronto, The agency did not originally intend to upload the video to YouTube, only display it on the company's homepage.
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Original:  Labeled "a Dove film", the commercial is entitled "evolution".
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Original:  Related stories Dove's Real Beauty looks at photoshoot techniques in commercial, October 12, 200
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Original: Beginning with a woman walking into a photo shoot.
Revised: The ad begins with a woman walking into a photo shoot.
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Original: Meanwhile in Colorado, Springs, on November 2 Ted Haggard resigned from National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines.
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Original:  Heldmyer said Kent Hovind was a flight risk and a "danger to the community ." Allegations in Colorado%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is leading social conservative voice.
Revised:  Heldmyer said Kent Hovind was a flight risk and a "danger to the community Allegations in Colorado%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is leading social conservative voice.
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Original:  Heldmyer said Kent Hovind was a flight risk and a "danger to the community ." Allegations in Colorado%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is leading social conservative voice.
Revised:  Heldmyer said Kent Hovind was a flight risk and a "danger to the community ." %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is leading social conservative voice.
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Original:  In his chuch Haggard preached, "we don't have to debate about what we should think about homosexual activity, it's written in the Bible."
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Original: Hovind's defense had insisted that experts assured him he was right, but "he sought out only the people who agreed with him, not the people who knew better," Heldmyer told .
Revised: Hovind's defense had insisted that experts assured him he was right, but "he sought out only the people who agreed with him, not the people who knew better," Heldmyer said .
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Original:  The couple will be setenced January 9, 2007 and Hovind is expect to remain in custody until then.
Revised:  The couple will be sentenced on January 9, 2007 and Hovind is expect to remain in custody until then.
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Original:  The couple will be setenced January 9, 2007 and Hovind is expect to remain in custody until then.
Revised:  The couple will be setenced January 9, 2007 and Hovind is expected to remain in custody until then.
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Original: Pensacola tax trial Hovind is a Young Earth creationist who earns income for speaking, selling merchandise (videos), and runs a asumement park that asserts humans and dinosaurs lived together.
Revised: Pensacola tax trial Hovind is a Young Earth creationist who earns income for speaking, selling merchandise (videos), and runs a amusement park that asserts humans and dinosaurs lived together.
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Original: Evangelist Kent Hovind and his wife, Jo, we found guilty on all counts of tax fraud concerning merchandise and amusement park admission sales.
Revised: Evangelist Kent Hovind and his wife, Jo, was found guilty on all counts of tax fraud concerning merchandise and amusement park admission sales.
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Original:  hovind claims that he runs a church, and thus should not have to pay taxes, while prosecutors claimed that he was actually running a business.
Revised:  Hovind claims that he runs a church, and thus should not have to pay taxes, while prosecutors claimed that he was actually running a business.
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Original:  For more information on the election, read Toronto municipal election, 2006.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gustavo Valdez 48-year-old Gustavo Valdez is the publisher of a small magazine and “actor, character,artist”.
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Original:  A: It's the city were I risen my kids, therefore I am interested in the city for the good will of the community and my family itself Category:Toronto, Ontario Category:Ontario Category:Canada Category:North America Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Elections Category:Elections in Cana
Revised:  A: It's the city were I risen my kids, therefore I am interested in the city for the good will of the community and my family itself 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% George Sawision 50-year-old George Sawision is a master electrician and enviromentalist.
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Original:  Category:Toronto, Ontario Category:Ontario Category:Canada Category:North America Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Elections Category:Elections in Cana
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Original: On November 13, Torontoians will be heading to the polls to vote for their ward's councillor and for mayor.
Revised: On November 13, Toronto residents will be heading to the polls to vote for their ward's councillor and for mayor.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Howard Bortenstein 52-year-old Howard Bortenstein is the founder/owner of Miller Bortenstein Consultants, “a management consulting firm specializing in information technology strategy and change management.” Q: Describe the three most important issues in your campaign.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Q: Describe the three most important issues in your campaign.
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Original: need innovation and more choices to break the cycle of poverty Redirect funding to major expansion of portable housing allowance and ownership programs Improve living conditions for tenants by enforcing property standards Promote private development of new affordable housing Develop plan and strong commitment to end chronic homelessness Crime Prevention We need to feel safe%DIFDELCMD < & %%% secure everywhere Strengthen neighbourhood-police relationships Create “Safe Neighbourhoods”
Revised: need innovation and more choices to break the cycle of poverty Redirect funding to major expansion of portable housing allowance and ownership programs Improve living conditions for tenants by enforcing property standards Promote private development of new affordable housing Develop plan and strong commitment to end chronic homelessness %DIFDELCMD < & %%% secure everywhere Strengthen neighbourhood-police relationships Create “Safe Neighbourhoods”
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Original:  Bortenstein did not respond to the question “Which council decision (since the 2003 election) do you feel the city/your ward should be most proud of, and which was least desirable?”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Toronto, Ontario Category:Ontario Category:Canada Category:North America Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Elections Category:Elections in Cana
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Toronto, Ontario Category:Ontario Category:Canada Category:North America Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Elections Category:Elections in Cana
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Original:  Bortenstein did not respond to the question “Which council decision (since the 2003 election) do you feel the city/your ward should be most proud of, and which was least desirable?”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Toronto, Ontario Category:Ontario Category:Canada Category:North America Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Elections Category:Elections in Cana
Revised:  Bortenstein did not respond to the question “Which council decision (since the 2003 election) do you feel the city/your ward should be most proud of, and which was least desirable?”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  no “ at risk neighbourhoods ’ youth funding and an absentee councillor battling windmills elsewhere, leaving the ward in auto-pilot.
Revised:  no " at risk neighbourhoods ’ youth funding and an absentee councillor battling windmills elsewhere, leaving the ward in auto-pilot.
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Original:  no “ at risk neighbourhoods ’ youth funding and an absentee councillor battling windmills elsewhere, leaving the ward in auto-pilot.
Revised:  no “ at risk neighbourhoods ' youth funding and an absentee councillor battling windmills elsewhere, leaving the ward in auto-pilot.
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Original:  Crime Prevention We need to feel safe & secure everywhere Strengthen neighbourhood-police relationships Create “Safe Neighbourhoods” volunteer organization Residents from all neighbourhoods and all income levels share these concerns.
Revised:  Crime Prevention We need to feel safe & secure everywhere Strengthen neighbourhood-police relationships Create "Safe Neighbourhoods" volunteer organization Residents from all neighbourhoods and all income levels share these concerns.
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Original:  Dramatic change from the current model of building “ monuments to poverty ” is required.
Revised:  Dramatic change from the current model of building " monuments to poverty ” is required.
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Original:  Dramatic change from the current model of building “ monuments to poverty ” is required.
Revised:  Dramatic change from the current model of building “ monuments to poverty " is required.
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Original:  So after the trauma of hepatitis injections and HIV screening at Sick Kids and fighting city hall to clean up the park the question remained “ How did this happen?
Revised:  So after the trauma of hepatitis injections and HIV screening at Sick Kids and fighting city hall to clean up the park the question remained " How did this happen?
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Original:  Well, I found out the hard way that isn ’ t true and I decided this needed to be changed.
Revised:  Well, I found out the hard way that isn ' t true and I decided this needed to be changed.
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Original:  Asa candidate, the question I receive most often is, “ what is your political party?
Revised:  Asa candidate, the question I receive most often is, " what is your political party?
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Original:  ” I am not aligned or a member of any political party.
Revised:  " I am not aligned or a member of any political party.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Patrick Kraemer 41-year-old Patrick Kraemer is a lawyer.
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Original:  Q: Describe the three most important issues in your campaign.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A: Energy, Crime and Poverty are the main planks of my platform and the most serious issues facing Ward 30.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Daniel Nicastro 62-year-old Daniel Nicastro is a restoration architect, writer, artist, and translator.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mr. Nicastro did not respond to the question “What does Toronto mean to you?”
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Original: We don ’ t need more police officers, we need to work together to make our communities safe and to feel safe in our communities.
Revised: We don ' t need more police officers, we need to work together to make our communities safe and to feel safe in our communities.
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Original:  Mr. Nicastro did not respond to the question “ What does Toronto mean to you? ”
Revised:  Mr. Nicastro did not respond to the question " What does Toronto mean to you? ”
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Original:  Mr. Nicastro did not respond to the question “ What does Toronto mean to you? ”
Revised:  Mr. Nicastro did not respond to the question “ What does Toronto mean to you? "
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Original:  Mr Cameron is quoted as saying about the development of this new market, “ It’s what we hoped for.
Revised:  Mr Cameron is quoted as saying about the development of this new market, " It’s what we hoped for.
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Original:  Mr Cameron is quoted as saying about the development of this new market, "It ’ s what we hoped for.
Revised:  Mr Cameron is quoted as saying about the development of this new market, "It ' s what we hoped for.
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Original:  He said that they should reduce emissions by 30\% below 1990 levels by 2020 and by at least 60\% by 2050 
Revised:  He said that they should reduce emissions by 30\% below 1990 levels by 2020 and by at least 60\% by 2050. 
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Original: As of early Sunday morning, the about 5 million people are still without power, and the French power authority, Electricité de France, said that the failure had originated in Germany, which has also effected other European countries.
Revised: As of early Sunday morning, about 5 million people are still without power, and the French power authority, Electricité de France, said that the failure had originated in Germany, which has also effected other European countries.
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Original:  The blackout was triggered due to a shudden drop in temperature, which over heated the power system.
Revised:  The blackout was triggered due to a sudden drop in temperature, which over heated the power system.
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Original:  The French emergency services where overloaded with calls , that they were force to ask that people not call.
Revised:  The French emergency services were so overloaded with calls , that they were force to ask that people not call.
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Original:  The French emergency services where overloaded with calls , that they were force to ask that people not call.
Revised:  The French emergency services where overloaded with calls that they were force to ask that people not call.
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Original: On the night of November 3rd a blackout in France leave 5 million in the dark.
Revised: On the night of November 3rd a blackout in France left 5 million in the dark.
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Original:  The blackout, which started at about 10PM local time (2100UTC), is said to have affected the French captial, Paris, and 15 other areas, including Rhone, Isere, Loire, Ain and Saone-et-Loire.
Revised:  The blackout, which started at about 10 P.M. local time (2100UTC), is said to have affected the French captial, Paris, and 15 other areas, including Rhone, Isere, Loire, Ain and Saone-et-Loire.
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Original:  As of early Sunday morning, about 5 million people are still without power, and the French power authority, Electricité de France, said that the failure had originated in Germany, which has also effected other European countries.
Revised:  As of early Sunday morning, about 5 million people are still without power, and the French power authority, Électricité de France, said that the failure had originated in Germany, which has also effected other European countries.
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Original:  The French emergency services were so overloaded with calls that they were force to ask that people not call.
Revised:  The French emergency services were so overloaded with calls that they were forced to ask that people not call.
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Original:  200px The storm began to lose convection and weaken, but managed to make it to Washington and British Columbia as a 40nbsp;mph storm with gusts up to 60 mph.
Revised:  150px The storm began to lose convection and weaken, but managed to make it to Washington and British Columbia as a 40nbsp;mph storm with gusts up to 60 mph.
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Original:  150px The storm began to lose convection and weaken, but managed to make it to Washington and British Columbia as a 40nbsp;
Revised:  150px The storm began to lose convection and weaken, but managed to make it to Washington and British Columbia as a 40
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Original: 125px An unnamed subtropical storm only known as "Storm 91C" packing winds of up to 40 mph struck Washington yesterday .
Revised: 125px An unnamed subtropical storm known only as "Storm 91C" packing winds of up to 40 mph struck Washington yesterday .
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Original:  Though damage was minimal, the storm was a very rare occurrence  .
Revised:  The storm was a very rare occurrence .
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Original:  Though damage was minimal, the storm was a very rare occurrence  .
Revised:  Though damage was minimal, the storm was a very rare occurrence , and caused minimal damage .
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Original: On November 2  Ted Haggard resigned from  National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship  New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is  leading social conservative voice.
Revised: On November 2 , Ted Haggard resigned from National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is leading social conservative voice.
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Original: On November 2  Ted Haggard resigned from  National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship  New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is  leading social conservative voice.
Revised: On November 2 Ted Haggard resigned from the National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is leading social conservative voice.
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Original: On November 2  Ted Haggard resigned from  National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship  New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is  leading social conservative voice.
Revised: On November 2 Ted Haggard resigned from National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship in the New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is leading social conservative voice.
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Original: On November 2  Ted Haggard resigned from  National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship  New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is  leading social conservative voice.
Revised: On November 2 Ted Haggard resigned from National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamine . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is leading social conservative voice.
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