wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  However many people still claim that they have LOST lots of money,some as much as their life savings and pensions and never received any payback.
Revised:  However many people still claim that they have lost considerable amounts of money,some as much as their life savings and pensions and never received any payback.
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Original: The Kubus scheme was a Ponzi scheme that originated in South Africa in the 1980s and was subsequently exported to the United States.
Revised: The Kubus scheme was a scheme that originated in South Africa in the 1980s and was subsequently exported to the United States.
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Original:  The who scheme crashed when the government decided to implement a law in retrospect, thereby declaring the scheme illegal.
Revised:  The whole scheme crashed when the government decided to implement a law in retrospect, thereby declaring the scheme illegal.
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Original: Nail polish In nail salons  employees can be exposed to dozens of chemicals found in nail polish and nail polish removers.
Revised: Nail polish In nail salons , employees can be exposed to dozens of chemicals found in nail polish and nail polish removers.
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Original:  Nail polishes have many ingredients which are considered toxic, including solvents, resins, and colorants and pigments, among others.
Revised:  Nail polishes have many ingredients which are considered toxic, including solvents, resins, colorants and pigments, among others.
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Original:  these include skin problems, respiratory disorders, neurologic disorders, and reproductive disorders 
Revised:  these include skin problems, respiratory disorders, neurologic disorders, and reproductive disorders .
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Original: File:Augrabies-Monkey-Asprin.jpg|A vervet monkey with a stolen box of aspirin that was not securely stored . |378x378px]]
Revised: File:Augrabies-Monkey-Asprin.jpg|A vervet monkey with a stolen box of aspirin that was not securely stored |378x378px]]
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Original:  Many public health professionals in the United States began writing reports of pharmaceutical contamination in waterways in the 1970s. ” Most pharmaceuticals are deposited in the environment through human consumption and excretion, and are often filtered ineffectively by municipal sewage treatment plants which are not designed to manage them.
Revised:  Many public health professionals in the United States began writing reports of pharmaceutical contamination in waterways in the 1970s. " Most pharmaceuticals are deposited in the environment through human consumption and excretion, and are often filtered ineffectively by municipal sewage treatment plants which are not designed to manage them.
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Original:  ” In parallel, the European Union is the second biggest consumer in the world (24\% of the world total) after the USA and in the majority of EU Member States, around 50\% of unused human medicinal products is not collected to be disposed of properly.
Revised:  " In parallel, the European Union is the second biggest consumer in the world (24\% of the world total) after the USA and in the majority of EU Member States, around 50\% of unused human medicinal products is not collected to be disposed of properly.
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Original:  In recent years, the proposition that pharmaceutical manufacturers should be responsible for their products “ from the cradle to the grave ,” has been gaining attention.
Revised:  In recent years, the proposition that pharmaceutical manufacturers should be responsible for their products " from the cradle to the grave ,” has been gaining attention.
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Original:  In recent years, the proposition that pharmaceutical manufacturers should be responsible for their products “ from the cradle to the grave ,” has been gaining attention.
Revised:  In recent years, the proposition that pharmaceutical manufacturers should be responsible for their products “ from the cradle to the grave " has been gaining attention.
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Original:  Though most of the waste goes to incineration and people are asked to throw unused or expired pharmaceuticals into the household waste investigations in Germany showed that up to 24\% of liquid pharmaceuticals and 7\% of tablets or ointments are disposed always or at least “rarely” via the toilet or sink.
Revised:  Though most of the waste goes to incineration and people are asked to throw unused or expired pharmaceuticals into the household waste investigations in Germany showed that up to 24\% of liquid pharmaceuticals and 7\% of tablets or ointments are disposed always or at least "rarely" via the toilet or sink.
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Original:  Presence in the environment frame|Methods of PPCP entry into the environment from residential homes via septic and sewage systems .
Revised:  Presence in the environment frame|Methods of PPCP entry into the environment from residential homes via septic and sewage systems 
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Original:  In addition, “ The EPA and FDA regulations state that a drug or chemical is not considered harmful until clear evidence shows that a substance causes harm".
Revised:  In addition, " The EPA and FDA regulations state that a drug or chemical is not considered harmful until clear evidence shows that a substance causes harm".
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Original:  Additionally, “ It is critical for us to develop an analytical method of identifying, testing, and regulating the amount of pharmaceuticals in the water systems ” . Data must be collected in order to accurately measure the prevalence of pharmaceuticals in drinking water.
Revised:  Additionally, " It is critical for us to develop an analytical method of identifying, testing, and regulating the amount of pharmaceuticals in the water systems ” . Data must be collected in order to accurately measure the prevalence of pharmaceuticals in drinking water.
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Original:  Additionally, “ It is critical for us to develop an analytical method of identifying, testing, and regulating the amount of pharmaceuticals in the water systems ” . Data must be collected in order to accurately measure the prevalence of pharmaceuticals in drinking water.
Revised:  Additionally, “ It is critical for us to develop an analytical method of identifying, testing, and regulating the amount of pharmaceuticals in the water systems " . Data must be collected in order to accurately measure the prevalence of pharmaceuticals in drinking water.
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Original:  “ Multiple Health risk assessments should be conducted to understand the effects of prolonged exposure to pharmaceuticals in drinking water ” . Community-based programs should be developed to monitor exposure and health outcomes.
Revised:  " Multiple Health risk assessments should be conducted to understand the effects of prolonged exposure to pharmaceuticals in drinking water ” . Community-based programs should be developed to monitor exposure and health outcomes.
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Original:  “ Multiple Health risk assessments should be conducted to understand the effects of prolonged exposure to pharmaceuticals in drinking water ” . Community-based programs should be developed to monitor exposure and health outcomes.
Revised:  “ Multiple Health risk assessments should be conducted to understand the effects of prolonged exposure to pharmaceuticals in drinking water " . Community-based programs should be developed to monitor exposure and health outcomes.
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Original:  “ Extensive research must be conducted to determine the amount of pharmaceutical contamination in the environment and its effects on animals and marine life ” . We must remember that many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so it is best for human excrement to not go into waterways, even after conventional treatment, which can also not remove these chemicals.
Revised:  " Extensive research must be conducted to determine the amount of pharmaceutical contamination in the environment and its effects on animals and marine life ” . We must remember that many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so it is best for human excrement to not go into waterways, even after conventional treatment, which can also not remove these chemicals.
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Original:  “ Extensive research must be conducted to determine the amount of pharmaceutical contamination in the environment and its effects on animals and marine life ” . We must remember that many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so it is best for human excrement to not go into waterways, even after conventional treatment, which can also not remove these chemicals.
Revised:  “ Extensive research must be conducted to determine the amount of pharmaceutical contamination in the environment and its effects on animals and marine life " . We must remember that many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so it is best for human excrement to not go into waterways, even after conventional treatment, which can also not remove these chemicals.
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Original:  It is therefore preferable for human feces and urine to go into fertile soil, where they will receive more effective treatment by numerous microbes found there, over longer amounts of time, and stay away from waterways, via the use of Urine-diverting Dry Toilets, Composting Toilets, and ArborLoos .
Revised:  It is therefore preferable for human feces and urine to go into fertile soil, where they will receive more effective treatment by numerous microbes found there, over longer amounts of time, and stay away from waterways, via the use of urine-diverting dry toilets, composting toilets, and Arborloos .
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Original:  338x338px| A class of antidepressants may be found in frogs and can significantly slow their development  Because of the high solubility of most PPCPs, aquatic organisms are especially vulnerable to their effects.
Revised:  338x338px| A class of antidepressants may be found in frogs and can significantly slow their development . Because of the high solubility of most PPCPs, aquatic organisms are especially vulnerable to their effects.
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Original:  Ecopharmacology is a broad term that includes studies of “PPCPs” irrespective of doses and route of entry into environment.
Revised:  Ecopharmacology is a broad term that includes studies of "PPCPs" irrespective of doses and route of entry into environment.
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Original:  A 2013 study of a drinking water treatment plant , found that of 30 PPCPs measured at both the source water and the drinking water locations, 76\% of PPCPs were removed, on average, in the water treatment plant.
Revised:  A 2013 study of a drinking water treatment plant found that of 30 PPCPs measured at both the source water and the drinking water locations, 76\% of PPCPs were removed, on average, in the water treatment plant.
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Original:  In a European cooperation project between 2008 and 2012 in comparison 4 hospital waste water treatment facilities were developed in Switzerland, Germany, The Netherlands and Luxembourg to investigate the elimination rates of concentrated waste water with pharmaceutical “cocktails” by using different and combined advanced treatment technologies.
Revised:  In a European cooperation project between 2008 and 2012 in comparison four hospital waste water treatment facilities were developed in Switzerland, Germany, The Netherlands and Luxembourg to investigate the elimination rates of concentrated waste water with pharmaceutical “cocktails” by using different and combined advanced treatment technologies.
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Original:  In a European cooperation project between 2008 and 2012 in comparison 4 hospital waste water treatment facilities were developed in Switzerland, Germany, The Netherlands and Luxembourg to investigate the elimination rates of concentrated waste water with pharmaceutical “cocktails” by using different and combined advanced treatment technologies.
Revised:  In a European cooperation project between 2008 and 2012 in comparison 4 hospital waste water treatment facilities were developed in Switzerland, Germany, The Netherlands and Luxembourg to investigate the elimination rates of concentrated waste water with pharmaceutical "cocktails" by using different and combined advanced treatment technologies.
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Original:  The agency also studied disposal practices for health care facilities where unused pharmaceuticals might be flushed rather than placed in solid waste, but did not develop wastewater regulations  Examples Blister packs 80\% of pills in the world are packed with blister packaging, which is the most convenient type for several reasons.
Revised:  The agency also studied disposal practices for health care facilities where unused pharmaceuticals might be flushed rather than placed in solid waste, but did not develop wastewater regulations . Examples Blister packs 80\% of pills in the world are packed with blister packaging, which is the most convenient type for several reasons.
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Original:  Blister packs have two main components, the “lid” and the “blister” (cavity).
Revised:  Blister packs have two main components, the "lid" and the "blister" (cavity).
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Original:  The most recent trend is to use biodegradable, eco-friendly “bio plastics” which are also called as biopolymers such as derivatives of starch, cellulose, protein, chitin and xylan for pharmaceutical packaging, to reduce the hostile effects to the environment.
Revised:  The most recent trend is to use biodegradable, eco-friendly "bio plastics" which are also called as biopolymers such as derivatives of starch, cellulose, protein, chitin and xylan for pharmaceutical packaging, to reduce the hostile effects to the environment.
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Original:  If a person who consumes a pharmaceutical uses a Urine-diverting Dry Toilet , in which the urine is dispersed into fertile soil among plants, would the microbes eventually decompose this chemical entirely?
Revised:  If a person who consumes a pharmaceutical uses a urine-diverting dry toilet , in which the urine is dispersed into fertile soil among plants, would the microbes eventually decompose this chemical entirely?
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Original:  Overview Since the 1990s, water contamination by pharmaceuticals has been an environmental issue of concern.
Revised:  Overview Since the 1990s, water pollution by pharmaceuticals has been an environmental issue of concern.
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Original:  Direct methods include contamination of surface water by hospitals, households, industries, or wastewater treatment plants.
Revised:  Direct methods include contamination of surface water by hospitals, households, industries, or sewage treatment plants.
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Original:  A study published in late 2014 reported a spike in the levels of ecstasy, ketamine, caffeine and acetaminophen in nearby rivers coinciding with a Taiwanese youth event attended by around 600,000 people.
Revised:  A study published in 2014 reported a spike in the levels of ecstasy, ketamine, caffeine and acetaminophen in nearby rivers coinciding with a Taiwanese youth event attended by around 600,000 people.
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Original:  The fraction not taken up into the blood stream will remain in the gut and eventually be excreted via the faeces .
Revised:  The fraction not taken up into the blood stream will remain in the gut and eventually be excreted via the feces .
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Original:  Hence, both urine and faeces from treated patients contain pharmaceutical residues.
Revised:  Hence, both urine and feces from treated patients contain pharmaceutical residues.
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Original: We must remember that many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so it is best for human excrement to not go into waterways, even after conventional  treatment, which can also not remove these chemicals.
Revised: Many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so it is best for human excrement to not go into waterways, even after conventional treatment, which can also not remove these chemicals.
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Original: We must remember that many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so it is best for human excrement to not go into waterways, even after conventional  treatment, which can also not remove these chemicals.
Revised: We must remember that many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so there are advantages when human excreta does not go into waterways, even after conventional treatment, which can also not remove these chemicals.
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Original: We must remember that many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so it is best for human excrement to not go into waterways, even after conventional  treatment, which can also not remove these chemicals.
Revised: We must remember that many pharmaceuticals pass through the human body unchanged, so it is best for human excrement to not go into waterways, even after conventional treatment, which also does not remove most of these chemicals.
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Original:  It is therefore preferable for human feces and urine to go into fertile soil, where they will receive more effective treatment by numerous microbes found there, over longer amounts of time, and stay away from waterways , via the use of urine-diverting dry toilets, composting toilets, and Arborloos .
Revised:  It is therefore preferable for human feces and urine to go into fertile soil, where they will receive more effective treatment by numerous microbes found there, over longer amounts of time, and stay away from waterways . This can be achieved via the use of urine-diverting dry toilets, composting toilets, and Arborloos .
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Original:    PPCPs have been detected in water bodies throughout the world.
Revised:  3 PPCPs have been detected in water bodies throughout the world.
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Original:  The European Union has declared pharmaceutical residues with the potential of contamination of water and soil to be "priority substances".
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Original:  3 Overview Since the 1990s, water pollution by pharmaceuticals has been an environmental issue of concern.
Revised:  Overview Since the 1990s, water pollution by pharmaceuticals has been an environmental issue of concern.
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Original: Reign The tomb of Ghiyasuddin Azam Shah ( 1872 ) Ghiyasuddin Azam Shah became the Sultan of Bengal after his own forces overthrew and killed his father Sultan Sikandar Shah at the Battle of Goalpara in 1390, despite Azam Shah ordering them not to kill his father.
Revised: Reign The tomb of Ghiyasuddin Azam Shah in 1872 ) Ghiyasuddin Azam Shah became the Sultan of Bengal after his own forces overthrew and killed his father Sultan Sikandar Shah at the Battle of Goalpara in 1390, despite Azam Shah ordering them not to kill his father.
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Original: Reign The tomb of Ghiyasuddin Azam Shah ( 1872 ) Ghiyasuddin Azam Shah became the Sultan of Bengal after his own forces overthrew and killed his father Sultan Sikandar Shah at the Battle of Goalpara in 1390, despite Azam Shah ordering them not to kill his father.
Revised: Reign The tomb of Ghiyasuddin Azam Shah ( 1872 Ghiyasuddin Azam Shah became the Sultan of Bengal after his own forces overthrew and killed his father Sultan Sikandar Shah at the Battle of Goalpara in 1390, despite Azam Shah ordering them not to kill his father.
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Original:   Shah Muhammad Sagir, a Muslim Bengali poet , wrote his famous work, Yusuf-Zulekha , during Ghiyasuddin's reign .
Revised:  Shah Muhammad Sagir, a Muslim Bengali poet , wrote his famous work, Yusuf-Zulekha at the request of the Sultan .
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Original:   Diplomatic and regional affairs The Sultan pioneered diplomatic relations with China by sending embassies to the Ming dynasty court in Peking.
Revised: He also had a profound regard for law. A story about him and a qazi is very famous as a folktale and moral story. Once, the sultan while hunting accidentally killed the son of a poor widow with his arrow. The widow appeared before a qazi and brought a charge of murder against the sultan. Ghiyasuddin Azam Shah was summoned by the Qazi, and appeared before the court like an ordinary accused person. Many people had gathered there to see a case against the sultan of the country. The sultan obeyed the law and gave indemnity to the poor widow for killing her son. When the trial was over the Qazi stood up and praised the sultan for his regard for the law. Diplomatic and regional affairs The Sultan pioneered diplomatic relations with China by sending embassies to the Ming dynasty court in Peking.
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Original: Then the sultan hat he would have instantly beheaded the qazi if he was found wanting in his duty as a judge .
Revised: Then the sultan said that he would have instantly beheaded the qazi if he was found wanting in his duty as a judge .
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Original: Then the sultan hat he would have instantly beheaded the qazi if he was found wanting in his duty as a judge .
Revised: Then the sultan hat he would have instantly beheaded the qazi if he faltered in his judgment .
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Original: Ghiyasuddin A'zam Shah ( lang|fa| ) was the third Sultan of Bengal and the Ilyas Shahi dynasty.
Revised: Ghiyasuddin A'zam Shah ( ) was the third Sultan of Bengal and the Ilyas Shahi dynasty.
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Original: Shrivardhan Fort Shrivardhan Fort is one of the two hill forts that constitute the Rajmachi fortification, the other being Manaranjan Fort.
Revised: Shrivardhan Fort is one of the two hill forts that constitute the Rajmachi fortification, the other being Manaranjan Fort.
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Original:  There are two water tanks at the top of the hill but one of them has an iron pillar in it...... References श्रीवर्धन तालुका Category:Forts in Pune distri
Revised:  There are two water tanks at the top of the hill but one of them has an iron pillar in it...... References Category:Forts in Pune distri
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Original:  There are two water tanks at the top of the hill but one of them has an iron pillar in it...... References श्रीवर्धन तालुका Category:Forts in Pune distri
Revised:  There are two water tanks at the top of the hill but one of them has an iron pillar in it...... References श्रीवर्धन तालुका Reference
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Original:  There are two water tanks at the top of the hill but one of them has an iron pillar in it. .....
Revised:  There are two water tanks at the top of the hill but one of them has an iron pillar in it. 
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Original:  How to reach There are two ways to reach the fort 1) Lonavla Tungarli way- It is an easy path which takes about 1 hour to reach the base village Udhewadi 2) Karjat-kondivade way- it requires a trekking up the hill for 2 hour .
Revised:  How to reach There are two ways to reach the fort 1) Lonavla Tungarli way- It is an easy path which takes about 1 hour to reach the base village Udhewadi 2) Karjat-kondivade way- it requires a trekking up the hill for 2-hour .
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Original:  This route passes through dense forest area through the Ulhas river valley .
Revised:  This route passes through dense forest area through the Ulhas river valley 
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Original:  This route passes through dense forest area through the Ulhas river valley  
Revised:  This route passes through dense forest area through the Ulhas river valley . 
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Original:  This route passes through dense forest area through the Ulhas river valley  
Revised:  This route passes through dense forest area through the Ulhas river valley Reference
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Original:  Dogs with this condition are always normal at rest and are usually described as being extremely fit, prime athletic specimens of their breed.
Revised:  Dogs with this condition are always normal at rest and are described as being extremely fit, prime athletic specimens of their breed.
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