wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Previously Norway has had approximately 170 soldiers stationed in Iraq, of which most have already been withdrawn . Stoltenberg notified George W. Bush of his decision on thursday  when Bush called him to congratulate on behalf of a victorious election.
Revised:  Previously Norway has had approximately 170 soldiers stationed in Iraq, of which most have already been withdrawn . Stoltenberg notified George W. Bush of his decision on thursday when Bush called to congratulate him on behalf of a victorious election.
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Original:  He said that Labour's plan to withdraw the same troops it previously supported sending to Iraq was contradictory
Revised:  He said Labour's plan to withdraw the same troops it previously supported sending to Iraq was contradictory
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Original: Leader of the Norwegian Labour Party, coming Prime Minister , Jens Stoltenberg announced yesterday that Norway is to withdraw rest of its troops from Iraq.
Revised: Leader of the Norwegian Labour Party, coming Prime Minister Jens Stoltenberg announced yesterday that Norway is to withdraw rest of its troops from Iraq.
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Original: Captain Troy Elwell, acting as a spokesman for the Sheriff's Office, said "Never seen anything quite like this one.
Revised: Captain Troy Elwell, as spokesman for the Sheriff's Office, said "Never seen anything quite like this one.
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Original: 'A horrible noise' Speaking to a local radio station, an airport worker who identified himelf only as Alan, said thate he heard "a horrible noise", before the aircraft "burst into flames with a trail of flames behind it."
Revised: 'A horrible noise' Speaking to a local radio station, an airport worker who identified himself only as Alan, said thate he heard "a horrible noise", before the aircraft "burst into flames with a trail of flames behind it."
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Original: 'A horrible noise' Speaking to a local radio station, an airport worker who identified himelf only as Alan, said thate he heard "a horrible noise", before the aircraft "burst into flames with a trail of flames behind it."
Revised: 'A horrible noise' Speaking to a local radio station, an airport worker who identified himelf only as Alan, said that he heard "a horrible noise", before the aircraft "burst into flames with a trail of flames behind it."
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Original: A witness to the crash, who was playing gold near the runway when the crash occurred, said that the aircraft was on fire and was "leaning to one side" as it was on approach to the airport.
Revised: A witness to the crash, who was playing golf near the runway when the crash occurred, said that the aircraft was on fire and was "leaning to one side" as it was on approach to the airport.
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Original: Another eyewitness said that she saw two fire engines attending the scene in the immediate aftermath of the crash;
Revised: Another eyewitness said that she saw two fire engines on the scene in the immediate aftermath of the crash;
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Original: A witness to the crash , who was playing golf near the runway when the crash occurred, said that the aircraft was on fire and was "leaning to one side" as it was on approach to the airport.
Revised: A witness , who was playing golf near the runway when the crash occurred, said that the aircraft was on fire and was "leaning to one side" as it was on approach to the airport.
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Original:  Reports suggested that the smoking aircraft came to a halt to the right of the runway after crashing into an w: instrument landing system beacon.
Revised:  Reports suggested that the smoking aircraft came to a halt to the right of the runway after crashing into an instrument landing system beacon.
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Original:  India and China are classified as developing countries in the Kyoto protocol, so  can get money and technology but are not restricted by its limits.
Revised:  India and China are classified as developing countries in the Kyoto protocol, so they can get money and technology but are not restricted by its limits.
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Original:  The   researchers observed the carbon dioxide bubbles in a champagne glass as they rise from nucleation points on the glass wall.
Revised:  The The researchers observed the carbon dioxide bubbles in a champagne glass as they rise from nucleation points on the glass wall.
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Original:  Then the process begins again with a new bubble expelled from the defect, forming rising strings of tiny bubbles.
Revised:  Then the process begins again with a new bubble expelled from the defect, forming rising strings of tiny 
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Original:  Dissolved gas in the champagne gradually collects in a vibrating bubble inside the defect, causing it to grow and soon expel gas from  defect, forming another bubble that sticks to the outside of the defect.
Revised:  Dissolved gas in the champagne gradually collects in a vibrating bubble inside the defect, causing it to grow and soon expel gas from the defect, forming another bubble that sticks to the outside of the defect.
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Original:  They start out as strings of bubbles that rise in pairs, then gradually transistion to bubbles in groups of threes, and finally settle down in a clockwork pattern of regularly spaced individual bubbles.
Revised:  They start out as strings of bubbles that rise in pairs, then gradually transition to bubbles in groups of threes, and finally settle down in a clockwork pattern of regularly spaced individual bubbles.
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Original: According to a latest patent published by Apple Computer, Inc., future Mac laptops may come with built-in video cameras.
Revised: According to a recent patent published by Apple Computer, Inc., future Mac laptops may come with built-in video cameras.
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Original:  Ostensibly, they would be used with the company's iChat AV video conferencing software, which allows for four way video conferencing, and up to nine way audio conferencing.
Revised:  Ostensibly, they would be used with the company's iChat AV video conferencing software, which allows for four-way video conferencing, and up to nine way audio conferencing.
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Original: According to a recent patent published by Apple Computer, Inc., future Mac laptops may come with built-in video cameras.
Revised: According to a recent patent published by Apple Computer, Inc., future Mac laptops will come with built-in video cameras.
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Original: An Apple PowerBook According to a recent patent published by Apple Computer, Inc., future Mac laptops will come with built-in video cameras.
Revised:  According to a recent patent published by Apple Computer, Inc., future Mac laptops will come with built-in video cameras.
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Original:  The camera could be configured to produce either streaming video, video stills, or images taken at intervals, and the camera would most likely have a built-in microphone
Revised:  NIGGA STOLE MY BIKE! 13155916
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Original: An Intel spokesperson confirmed Thursday that Dell would be no longer offering server with Intel Itanium CPUs.
Revised: An Intel spokesperson confirmed Thursday that Dell would no longer be offering servers with Intel Itanium CPUs.
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Original:  The majority of Dell servers use an  x86 chip, however a growing number use the 64bit Intel Xeon.
Revised:  The majority of Dell servers use an x86 chip, however a growing number use the 64-bit Intel Xeon.
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Original:  Sales of Itanium servers however have been very poor  last year Dell sold only 1,371 Itanium servers, and 12 the previous year.
Revised:  Sales of Itanium servers have been very poor last year Dell sold only 1,371 Itanium servers, and 12 the previous year.
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Original:  Sales of Itanium servers however have been very poor  last year Dell sold only 1,371 Itanium servers, and 12 the previous year.
Revised:  Sales of Itanium servers however have been very poor ; last year Dell sold only 1,371 Itanium servers, and 12 the previous year.
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Original:  IBM also phased out Itanium-based servers They chose to replace it with IBM Power CPUs.
Revised:  IBM also phased out Itanium-based servers , replacing them with IBM Power CPUs.
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Original:  Fujitsu, HP, Hitachi NEC, SGI and Unisys are the only major manufacturers to still offer Itanium based servers.
Revised:  Fujitsu, HP, Hitachi NEC, SGI and Unisys are the only major manufacturers to still offer Itanium-based servers.
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Original:  The Intel Itanium was introduced in the early 1990s.
Revised:  The Intel Itanium was designed in the early 1990s.
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Original:  It was designed to be the processor of choice for 64-bit computers .
Revised:  It was intended to be the processor of choice for 64-bit computers .
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Original:  It suffered from several major flaws preventing wide spread adoption.
Revised:  It suffered from several major flaws preventing widespread adoption.
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Original:  Unlike the AMD 64 bit chips, the Intel Itanium uses requires a different instruction set from x86 chips.
Revised:  Unlike competing AMD64 chips, the Intel Itanium uses requires a different instruction set from x86 chips.
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Original:  Unlike the AMD 64 bit chips, the Intel Itanium uses requires a different instruction set from x86 chips.
Revised:  Unlike the AMD 64 bit chips, the Intel Itanium uses a different instruction set from x86 chips.
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Original: The seemingly endless saga of car bombings continued to haunt citizens of Lebanon on Friday night, when an explosionripped through multiple cars and buildings, killing one and injuring 19 people.
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Original:  The blast took place close to midnight near Byblos Bank in the J'eitawi district of Ashrafieh in Beirut.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bomb triggered by timer Major General Ashraf Rifi, commander of the Internal Security Forces, confirmed that the bomb was put in a bag and placed between two cars.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Major General Ashraf Rifi, commander of the Internal Security Forces, confirmed that the bomb was put in a bag and placed between two cars.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The bomb shattered through a nearby coffee shop, killing the shop owner upon impact.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dwindling confidence A series of car bombings preceded this latest explosion, predominantly in Christian areas.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A series of car bombings preceded this latest explosion, predominantly in Christian areas.
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Original:  The latest exposure of Lebanon's shaky security state comes at a time when the country's two top leaders are absent.
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Original: A court has freed prominent Malawian politican Gwanda Chakuamba on bail after Chakuamba denied insulting ridiculing Malawi president Bingu wa Mutharika at a political rally.
Revised: A court has freed prominent Malawian politican Gwanda Chakuamba on bail after Chakuamba denied ridiculing Malawi president Bingu wa Mutharika at a political rally.
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Original:  Turn out as been strong, turnout results  predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)
Revised:  Turn out as been strong, turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)
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Original: Their is a little under an hour to go until polls close in the 2005 New Zealand General Election  Both National leader Don Brash and The Prime Minister Helen Clark (Labour) have already cast their vote .
Revised: There is a little under an hour to go until polls close in the 2005 New Zealand General Election Both National leader Don Brash and The Prime Minister Helen Clark (Labour) have already cast their vote .
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Original: Their is a little under an hour to go until polls close in the 2005 New Zealand General Election  Both National leader Don Brash and The Prime Minister Helen Clark (Labour) have already cast their vote .
Revised: Their is a little under an hour to go until polls close in the 2005 New Zealand General Election . Both National leader Don Brash and The Prime Minister Helen Clark (Labour) have already cast their vote .
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Original: Their is a little under an hour to go until polls close in the 2005 New Zealand General Election  Both National leader Don Brash and The Prime Minister Helen Clark (Labour) have already cast their vote .
Revised: Their is a little under an hour to go until polls close in the 2005 New Zealand General Election Both National leader Don Brash and the Prime Minister Helen Clark (Labour) have already cast their vote .
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Original: Their is a little under an hour to go until polls close in the 2005 New Zealand General Election  Both National leader Don Brash and The Prime Minister Helen Clark (Labour) have already cast their vote .
Revised: Their is a little under an hour to go until polls close in the 2005 New Zealand General Election Both National leader Don Brash and The Prime Minister Helen Clark (Labour) have already cast their votes .
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Original:  Turn out as been strong,  turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)  Under New Zealand's  MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
Revised:  Turnout has been strong, turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%) Under New Zealand's MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
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Original:  Turn out as been strong,  turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)  Under New Zealand's  MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
Revised:  Turn out as been strong, and turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%) Under New Zealand's MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
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Original:  Turn out as been strong,  turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)  Under New Zealand's  MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
Revised:  Turn out as been strong, turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turnout (77\%) Under New Zealand's MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
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Original:  Turn out as been strong,  turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)  Under New Zealand's  MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
Revised:  Turn out as been strong, turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%) . Under New Zealand's MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
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Original:  Turn out as been strong,  turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)  Under New Zealand's  MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
Revised:  Turn out as been strong, turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%) Under New Zealand's w: MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
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Original:  Turn out as been strong,  turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)  Under New Zealand's  MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
Revised:  Turn out as been strong, turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%) Under New Zealand's MMP system, parties must win either an electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
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Original:  Turn out as been strong,  turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)  Under New Zealand's  MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
Revised:  Turn out as been strong, turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%) Under New Zealand's MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win seats in the 120-seat , parliament
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Original:  Turn out as been strong,  turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%)  Under New Zealand's  MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat , parliament
Revised:  Turn out as been strong, turnout results are predicted to be to be higher than the 2002 turn out (77\%) Under New Zealand's MMP system, parties must win either a electorate seat or 5\% of the party vote to win a seat in the 120-seat parliament
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Original: Current information suggests that the plain was flying over the Baltic Sea when it suddenly veered off course due to a failure in navigation equipment.
Revised: Current information suggests that the plane was flying over the Baltic Sea when it suddenly veered off course due to a failure in navigation equipment.
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Original: The opinions expressed by participants varied, with Venezuelan President, Hugo Chavez condemning the document as having been " concieved in darkness".
Revised: The opinions expressed by participants varied, with Venezuelan President, Hugo Chavez condemning the document as having been " conceived in darkness".
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Original:  While in 298 of 299 constituencies the federal elections take place on  18th september , a Dresden constituency has to vote on 2nd October , caused by the death of the candidate for Dresden I , Kerstin Lorenz.
Revised:  While in 298 of 299 constituencies the federal elections take place on 18th , a Dresden constituency has to vote on 2nd October , caused by the death of the candidate for Dresden I , Kerstin Lorenz.
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Original:  While in 298 of 299 constituencies the federal elections take place on  18th september , a Dresden constituency has to vote on 2nd October , caused by the death of the candidate for Dresden I , Kerstin Lorenz.
Revised:  While in 298 of 299 constituencies the federal elections take place on 18th september , a Dresden constituency has to vote on October 2nd , caused by the death of the candidate for Dresden I , Kerstin Lorenz.
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Original:  The CDU would then actually have to urge their supporters not to vote for them with their second vote, because that could change their overhang seat into a "normal" seat, which the CDU would then be missing in another state where no overhang seats occured thus reducing their total seats by one  
Revised:  The CDU would then actually have to urge their supporters not to vote for them with their second vote, because that could change their overhang seat into a "normal" seat, which the CDU would then be missing in another state where no overhang seats occured thus reducing their total seats by one . 
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Original:  A complaint against the 2002 election at the w:German constitional court is still not decided
Revised:  A complaint against the 2002 election at the German onstitutional court is still not decided
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Original:  A complaint against the 2002 election at the German onstitutional court is still not decided
Revised:  A complaint against the 2002 election at the German constitutional court is still not decided
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Original:  This is mainly caused by overhang seats, which occur when a party gains more seats by winning constiuencies than they would actually be entitled to according to the Percentage of second votes they get.
Revised:  This is mainly caused by overhang seats, which occur when a party gains more seats by winning constituencies than they would actually be entitled to according to the Percentage of second votes they get.
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Original:  Polls suggest that exactly that is going to happen with the CDU in Saxonia .
Revised:  Polls suggest that exactly that is going to happen with the CDU in Saxony .
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Original:  While in 298 of 299 constituencies the federal elections take place on September 18th, a Dresden constituency has to vote on October 2nd, caused by the death of the NPD candidate there, Kerstin Lorenz.
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Original:  A leaked portion of the final report this week suggested he had failed to follow procedure and reacted slowly to trouble    ]
Revised:  Investigators have suggested he had failed to follow procedure and reacted slowly to trouble ]
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Original:  A leaked portion of the final report this week suggested he had failed to follow procedure and reacted slowly to trouble    ]
Revised:  A leaked portion of the final report this week suggested he had failed to follow procedure and reacted slowly to trouble . ]
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Original:  A leaked portion of the final report this week suggested he had failed to follow procedure and reacted slowly to trouble    ]
Revised:  A leaked portion of the final report this week suggested he had failed to follow procedure and reacted slowly to trouble w]
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Original: The Court of Inquiry found that captain Zlatko Glusica was sleeping through much of the three-hour Dubai-Mangalore flight and was disorientated as the Boeing 737-800 came in to land;
Revised: The Court of Inquiry found that captain Zlatko Glusica was sleeping through much of the three-hour Dubai-Mangalore flight and "disorientated" as the Boeing 737-800 came in to land;
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Original:  The non-handling pilot should take over the control if he or she thinks there’s going to be a crash, instead of sitting like a robot.  [ 
Revised:  The non-handling pilot should take over the control if he or she thinks there’s going to be a crash, instead of sitting like a robot. " [ 
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Original:  The non-handling pilot should take over the control if he or she thinks there’s going to be a crash, instead of sitting like a robot.  [ 
Revised:  The non-handling pilot should take over the control if he or she thinks there’s going to be a crash, instead of sitting like a robot. [t 
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Original:  They feel the investigation "created an ugly picture about the Serbian pilots... without taking into account the circumstances" leading to the accident  
Revised:  They feel the investigation "created an ugly picture about the Serbian pilots... without taking into account the circumstances" leading to the accident . 
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Original:  Riots in the town of Salt in Jordan have ended.
Revised: A view of the town Riots in the town of Salt in Jordan have ended.
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Original:  34 have been arrested over the riots, as has the policeman who pulled the trigger   
Revised:  34 have been arrested over the riots, as has the policeman who pulled the trigger . 
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Original:  Roadblocks of burning tyres were formed  
Revised:  Roadblocks of burning tyres were formed . 
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Original: 25-year-old Suleiman Khreisat was shot in the head on Wednesday and remains critical ;
Revised: 25-year-old Suleiman Khreisat was shot in the head on Wednesday and remains in critical condition ;
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