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Original:  Alex's mother believes that Portillo has "no business being near children at all" and should be fired, calling her reassignment "just a slap in the face"  
Revised:  Alex's mother believes that Portillo has "no business being near children at all" and should be fired, calling her reassignment "just a slap in the face" . 
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Original:  But the school district is investigating the issue , says St.
Revised:  But the school district is investigating Portillo's actions , says St.
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Original:  Lucie County School District spokeswoman Janice Karst, and it could be up to two weeks before a conclusion is reached   .
Revised:  Lucie County School District spokeswoman Janice Karst, and it could be up to two weeks before a conclusion is reached . .
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Original: According to school officials, Morningside Elementary School teacher Wendy Portillo held a vote in her kindergarten classroom concerning the removal of 5 year old Alex Barton.
Revised: According to school officials, Morningside Elementary School teacher Wendy Portillo held a vote in her kindergarten classroom concerning the removal of 5-year-old Alex Barton.
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Original: Alex's mother described the eventsthat occurred .
Revised: Alex's mother gave her account of the events .
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Original:  She said each of his classmates were allowed to say what they what they didn't like about him;
Revised:  She said each of his classmates was allowed to say what they what they didn't like about him;
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Original:  She said each of his classmates was allowed to say what they what they didn't like about him;
Revised:  She said each of his classmates was allowed to say what they didn't like about him;
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Original:  She says  Alex has had disciplinary problems stemming from his condition.
Revised:  She says that Alex has had disciplinary problems stemming from his condition.
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Original:  The UK Ministry of Defence released a statement.
Revised:  The UK Ministry of Defence (MoD) creleased a statement.
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Original:  It said that "There were no casualties and the submarine remains watertight, is safe on the surface and able to operate under its own power   .
Revised:  It said that "There were no casualties and the submarine remains watertight, is safe on the surface and able to operate under its own power ." .
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Original: HMS Superb, a navy submarine from the United Kingdom crashed into rocks on the northern half of the Red Sea yesterday.
Revised: The incident occurred at the Red seaHMS Superb, a navy submarine from the United Kingdom crashed into rocks on the northern half of the Red Sea yesterday.
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Original:  The UK Ministry of Defence (MoD) creleased a statement.
Revised:  The UK Ministry of Defence (MoD) released a statement.
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Original: The incident occurred at the Red seaHMS Superb, a navy submarine from the United Kingdom  crashed into rocks on the northern half of the Red Sea on May 26.
Revised: The incident occurred at the Red seaHMS Superb, a navy submarine from the United Kingdom , crashed into rocks on the northern half of the Red Sea on May 26.
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Original: The incident occurred at the Red seaHMS Superb, a navy submarine from the United Kingdom  crashed into rocks on the northern half of the Red Sea on May 26.
Revised: The incident occurred at the Red seaHMS Superb, a navy submarine from the United Kingdom crashed into rocks in the northern half of the Red Sea on May 26.
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Original:  It said that " There were no casualties and the submarine remains watertight, is safe on the surface and able to operate under its own power."
Revised:  It said that " there were no casualties and the submarine remains watertight, is safe on the surface and able to operate under its own power."
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Original:  The MoD have stated that they are in the process of informing the relatives of the crew 
Revised:  The MoD has stated that the process of informing the relatives of the crew 
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Original:  The company may appeal the ruling to the New Jersey Supreme Court .
Revised:  No decision has yet been made on whether the company will appeal the ruling to the New Jersey Supreme Court .
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Original:  The company may appeal the ruling to the New Jersey Supreme Court .
Revised:  The company may appeal the ruling .
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Original:  Attorneys for Owens-Illinois  that U.S. ships when docked are subject to the law of Spain, and that the case should be heard in Spanish courts.
Revised:  Attorneys for Owens-Illinois argued that U.S. ships when docked are subject to the law of Spain, and that the case should be heard in Spanish courts.
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Original:  The defendant, Ohio-based company Owens Illinois, Inc., had sought a trial in a Spanish court, an opinion which was shared by the Superior Court which heard the case  .
Revised:  The defendant, Ohio-based company Owens Illinois, Inc., had sought a trial in a Spanish court, an opinion which was shared by the Superior Court that had heard the case .
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Original:  [[Image:Asbestos fibres.jpg|Asbestos fibers ]] The Spanish citizens worked aboard U.S. ships between 1950 and 1998, and claim  they were exposed to asbestos dust and fibers from piping insulation produced by Owens-Illinois.
Revised:  [[Image:Asbestos fibres.jpg|Asbestos fibers ]] The Spanish citizens worked aboard U.S. ships between 1950 and 1998, and claim that they were exposed to asbestos dust and fibers from piping insulation produced by Owens-Illinois.
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Original:  The piping insulation was originally manufactured in Sayreville, Middlesex County, and Berlin, Camden County  New Jersey.
Revised:  The piping insulation was originally manufactured in Sayreville, Middlesex County, and Berlin, Camden County , New Jersey.
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Original:  Attorneys for Owens-Illinois argued that U.S. ships when docked are subject to the law of Spain, and that the case should be heard in Spanish courts.
Revised:  Attorneys for Owens-Illinois argued that U.S. ships , when docked, are subject to the law of Spain, and that the case should be heard in Spanish courts.
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Original:  Attorneys for Owens-Illinois argued that U.S. ships when docked are subject to the law of Spain, and that the case should be heard in Spanish courts.
Revised:  Attorneys for Owens-Illinois argued that U.S. ships when docked are subject to the law of Spain, and so the case should be heard in Spanish courts.
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Original:  In its balance sheet for the first quarter of 2008  the company reported US$835 million in asbestos-related liabilities.
Revised:  In its balance sheet for the first quarter of 2008 , the company reported US$835 million in asbestos-related liabilities.
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Original:  He went on to note that: "We exited the business 50 years ago and have been dealing with the legal issues for almost 30 years.
Revised:  "We exited the business 50 years ago and have been dealing with the legal issues for almost 30 years.
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Original:  Patients with malignant mesothelioma generally do not have positive outcomes, and once diagnosed  have six months to a year to live.
Revised:  Patients with malignant mesothelioma generally do not have positive outcomes, and once diagnosed typically have six months to a year to live.
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Original: Image:ISS after STS-122 02 2008.jpg|The International Space Station in Feb 2008]] According to a NASA status report, the lone toilet on the International Space Station (ISS) has broken, leaving the astronauts on board having to use a rigged up system of bags to collect any liquid waste.
Revised: Image:ISS after STS-122 02 2008.jpg|The International Space Station in Feb 2008]] According to a NASA status report, the lone toilet on the International Space Station (ISS) has broken, leaving the astronauts on board having to use a rigged-up system of bags to collect any liquid waste.
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Original:  According to NASA  the collection fan motor broke sometime last week , after one of the crew used the Russian made toilet in the space station.
Revised:  According to NASA , the collection fan motor broke sometime last week , after one of the crew used the Russian made toilet in the space station.
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Original:  According to NASA  the collection fan motor broke sometime last week , after one of the crew used the Russian made toilet in the space station.
Revised:  According to NASA the collection fan motor broke sometime last week after one of the crew used the Russian made toilet in the space station.
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Original:  According to NASA  the collection fan motor broke sometime last week , after one of the crew used the Russian made toilet in the space station.
Revised:  According to NASA the collection fan motor broke sometime last week , after one of the crew used the Russian-made toilet in the space station.
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Original:  The NASA status report quotes the crew as hearing “ a loud noise and the fan stopped working".
Revised:  The NASA status report quotes the crew as hearing " a loud noise and the fan stopped working".
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Original:  The crew had been temporarily using the toilet in the Soyuz capsule, however this had a very limited capacity.
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Original:  The seven year old toilet has broken once before but not for a long period of time.
Revised:  The seven-year old toilet has broken once before but not for a long period of time.
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Original:  The baby has been placed in provincial care  
Revised:  The baby has been placed in provincial care . 
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Original:  This incident turned out to be a hoax, and no child was in danger  
Revised:  This incident turned out to be a hoax, and no child was in danger . 
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Original: Image:B1-B Lancer and cluster bombs.jpg|250px|An American B-1b Lancer drops cluster bombs.
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Original:  ]] Cluster bombs have been used in countries such as Cambodia, Kosovo, Afghanistan and Lebanon but they more than 100 countries and multiple humanitarian organisations have supported the creation of the ban on their use, as they can remain dangerous for many years after being dropped and can cause "unacceptable harm to civilians".
Revised:  ]] Cluster bombs have been used in countries such as Cambodia, Kosovo, Afghanistan and Lebanon but more than 100 countries and multiple humanitarian organisations have supported the creation of the ban on their use, as they can remain dangerous for many years after being dropped and can cause "unacceptable harm to civilians".
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Original: British Prime Minister Gordon Brown has said that an international treaty , aimed at banning the use of cluster bombs is "very close" to being achieved.
Revised: British Prime Minister Gordon Brown has said that an international treaty aimed at banning the use of cluster bombs is "very close" to being achieved.
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Original:  It is hoped that many other countries, both present at the talks and those notpresent , such as the United States and Canada  will sign up to the treaty.
Revised:  It is hoped that many other countries, whether present at the talks and those notpresent , such as the United States and Canada will sign up to the treaty.
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Original:  It is hoped that many other countries, both present at the talks and those notpresent , such as the United States and Canada  will sign up to the treaty.
Revised:  It is hoped that many other countries, both present at the talks or not , such as the United States and Canada will sign up to the treaty.
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Original:  It is hoped that many other countries, both present at the talks and those notpresent , such as the United States and Canada  will sign up to the treaty.
Revised:  It is hoped that many other countries, both present at the talks and those notpresent , such as the United States and Canada , will sign up to the treaty.
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Original:  ]] Cluster bombs have been used in countries such as Cambodia, Kosovo, Afghanistan and Lebanon but more than 100 countries and multiple humanitarian organisations have supported the creation of the ban on their use, as they can remain dangerous for many years after being dropped and can cause "unacceptable harm to civilians".
Revised:  ]] Cluster bombs have been used in countries such as Cambodia, Kosovo, Afghanistan and Lebanon . More than 100 countries and multiple humanitarian organisations have supported the creation of the ban on their use, as they can remain dangerous for many years after being dropped and can cause "unacceptable harm to civilians".
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Original:  ]] Cluster bombs have been used in countries such as Cambodia, Kosovo, Afghanistan and Lebanon but more than 100 countries and multiple humanitarian organisations have supported the creation of the ban on their use, as they can remain dangerous for many years after being dropped and can cause "unacceptable harm to civilians".
Revised:  ]] Cluster bombs have been used in countries such as Cambodia, Kosovo, Afghanistan and Lebanon but more than 100 countries and multiple humanitarian organisations have supported a ban on their use, as they can remain dangerous for many years after being dropped and can cause "unacceptable harm to civilians".
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Original:  The claim comes after 10 days of talks in Dublin between 109 nations, however countries such as the United States, Russia and China oppose the treaty.
Revised:  Brown's comments come after ten days of talks in Dublin between 109 nations, however countries such as the United States, Russia and China oppose the treaty.
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Original:  The claim comes after 10 days of talks in Dublin between 109 nations, however countries such as the United States, Russia and China oppose the treaty.
Revised:  The claim comes after 10 days of talks in Dublin between 109 nations, but countries such as the United States, Russia and China oppose the treaty.
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Original:  A final draft is due to be shown to delegates at the talk this afternoon and could result in a deal "by the end of the week, possibly sooner" according the the British Foreign and Commonwealth Office.
Revised:  A final draft is due to be shown to delegates at a talk this afternoon and could result in a deal "by the end of the week, possibly sooner" according the the British Foreign and Commonwealth Office.
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Original:  The move by Mr Brown would also mean that the entire stockpile of cluster bombs owned by the UK would also be scrapped, costing taxpayers millions.
Revised:  The move by Brown would mean that the entire stockpile of cluster bombs owned by the UK would also be scrapped, costing taxpayers millions.
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Original:  The move by Mr Brown would also mean that the entire stockpile of cluster bombs owned by the UK would also be scrapped, costing taxpayers millions.
Revised:  The move by Mr Brown would also mean that the entire stockpile of cluster bombs owned by the UK would be scrapped, costing taxpayers millions.
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Original:  However many countries such as Britain, Germany, Japan and Switzerland  asked for 7 to 15 years to bring in the rules, however many humanitarian organisations have criticised this move .
Revised:  While many countries such as Britain, Germany, Japan and Switzerland asked for 7 to 15 years to bring in the rules, however many humanitarian organisations have criticised this move .
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Original:  However many countries such as Britain, Germany, Japan and Switzerland  asked for 7 to 15 years to bring in the rules, however many humanitarian organisations have criticised this move .
Revised:  However many countries such as Britain, Germany, Japan and Switzerland have asked for 7 to 15 years to bring in the rules, however many humanitarian organisations have criticised this move .
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Original:  However many countries such as Britain, Germany, Japan and Switzerland  asked for 7 to 15 years to bring in the rules, however many humanitarian organisations have criticised this move .
Revised:  However many countries such as Britain, Germany, Japan and Switzerland asked for 7 to 15 years to bring in the rules, many humanitarian organisations have criticised this move .
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Original:  However many countries such as Britain, Germany, Japan and Switzerland  asked for 7 to 15 years to bring in the rules, however many humanitarian organisations have criticised this move .
Revised:  However many countries such as Britain, Germany, Japan and Switzerland asked for 7 to 15 years to bring in the rules, however many humanitarian organisations have criticised this suggestion .
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Original: One of the children who was recently taken from the Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints (FLDS) compound in Texas  has been reunited with their parents after a deal was struck between the Texas Department of Family and Protective Services and the parents.
Revised: One of the children who was recently taken from the Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints (FLDS) compound in Texas , has been reunited with their parents after a deal was struck between the Texas Department of Family and Protective Services and the parents.
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Original: One of the children who was recently taken from the Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints (FLDS) compound in Texas  has been reunited with their parents after a deal was struck between the Texas Department of Family and Protective Services and the parents.
Revised: One of the children who was recently taken from the Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints (FLDS) compound in Texas has been reunited with his/her parents after a deal was struck between the Texas Department of Family and Protective Services and the parents.
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Original:  This move comes after an appeals court in Texas ruled that Texas Child Protective Services should not have taken the children from the FLDS.
Revised:  The agreement follows an appeals court-ruling that Texas Child Protective Services should not have taken the children from the FLDS.
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Original: A view of the FLDS ranch  Finally, for state custody to be allowed there must also have been "reasonable efforts have been made to enable the child to return home".
Revised: A view of the FLDS ranch . Finally, for state custody to be allowed there must also have been "reasonable efforts have been made to enable the child to return home".
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Original:  If they did that, they would suddenly be outside the court's juristiction , putting them at risk of abuse.
Revised:  If they did that, they would suddenly be outside the court's jurisdiction , putting them at risk of abuse.
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Original:  Police were monitoring the compound ever since it was bought by the group one year ago.
Revised:  Police were monitoring the property ever since it was bought by the group one year ago.
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Original:  The children were found in a 1700-acre ranch belonging to the Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints.
Revised:  The children were found in a 1700-acre compound belonging to the Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints.
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Original:  Police were monitoring the property ever since it was bought by the group one year ago.
Revised:  Police were monitoring the compound ever since it was bought by the group one year ago.
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Original: A new memorial opened in Berlin that honors Nazis' gay victims on Tuesday .
Revised: A new memorial opened in Berlin on Tuesday in honor of homosexual victims of the Nazis .
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Original:  The monument also aims to address discrimination and social stigma of today's society by confronting visitors with an image of a same-sex couple kissing.
Revised:  The monument also aims to address the discrimination towards and social stigma of today's society by confronting visitors with an image of a same-sex couple kissing.
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Original:  The monument also aims to address discrimination and social stigma of today's society by confronting visitors with an image of a same-sex couple kissing.
Revised:  The monument also aims to address discrimination and social stigma surrounding homosexuality in today's society by confronting visitors with an image of a same-sex couple kissing.
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Original:  The monument is a sloping gray concrete slab on the edge of Berlin's Tiergarten park  which echoes the vast field of smaller slabs that make up Germany's memorial to Jewish victims of the Holocaust, opened three years ago across the road.
Revised:  The monument is a sloping gray concrete slab on the edge of Berlin's Tiergarten park , which echoes the vast field of smaller slabs that make up Germany's memorial to Jewish victims of the Holocaust, opened three years ago across the road.
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Original:  Nazi Germany declared homosexuality an deviation that threatened the German race, and convicted some 50,000 homosexuals as criminals.
Revised:  Nazi Germany declared homosexuality a deviation that threatened the German race, and convicted some 50,000 homosexuals as criminals.
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Original:  An estimated 10,000 to 15,000 gay men were deported to concentration camps , where few survived.
Revised:  An estimated 10,000 to 15,000 gay men were deported to concentration camps where few survived.
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Original:  Berlin Mayor Klaus Wowereit stated how he regrets at the timing it took to honor the Nazis' gay victims.
Revised:  Berlin Mayor Klaus Wowereit stated that he regrets the lengthy time it took to honor the Nazis' gay victims.
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Original:  However, the law falls short of  formal marriage.
Revised:  However, the law falls short of permitting formal marriage.
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Original: Nazi Germany declared homosexuality a deviation that threatened the German race , and convicted some 50,000 homosexuals as criminals.
Revised: Nazi Germany declared homosexuality a deviation that threatened the German race and convicted some 50,000 homosexuals as criminals.
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Original: frame|King Fahd bin Abdelaziz Al Saud King Fahd of Saudi Arabia has been admitted to a hospital in Riyadh for testing.
Revised:  King Fahd of Saudi Arabia has been admitted to a hospital in Riyadh for testing.
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Original: The number of mobile telephony users in Moldova increased by 47.3 \% in the first quarter of 2008 against the last year and exceeded 2 mln 88.6 thousand .
Revised: The number of mobile phone users in Moldova increased by 47.3 \% in the first quarter of 2008 against the last year and exceeded 2 mln 88.6 thousand .
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Original:  At the beginning of this year, the number of mobile telephony users was of 1 mln 882.8 thousand .
Revised:  At the beginning of this year, the number of mobile phone users was of 1 mln 882.8 thousand .
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Original:  A year and a half later the figure amounted to 1.5 mln users.
Revised:  A year and a half later the figure amounted to 1.5 million users.
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Original:  During the first quarter of 2008, mobile telephony service suppliers connected to their network over 205.8 thousand new users, by more than thrice more against first quarter of 2007.
Revised:  During the first quarter of 2008, mobile phone service suppliers connected to their network over 205.8 thousand new users, by more than thrice more against first quarter of 2007.
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