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Original:  Immaturity specification of USB 3.0 is the main reason that the Intel unreleased the actual standard of USB 3.0. Nick Knupffer, Spokesperson of Intel, finally claimed that Intel will release related technological specifications on USB 3.0 for the information technology industry to prevent unnecessary conflicts on standards and specifications
Revised:  Immaturity specification of USB 3.0 is the main reason that the Intel unreleased the actual standard of USB 3.0. Nick Knupffer, a spokesperson for Intel, claimed that Intel will release related technological specifications on USB 3.0 for the information technology industry to prevent unnecessary conflicts on standards and specifications
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Original:  Immaturity specification of USB 3.0 is the main reason that the Intel unreleased the actual standard of USB 3.0. Nick Knupffer, Spokesperson of Intel, finally claimed that Intel will release related technological specifications on USB 3.0 for the information technology industry to prevent unnecessary conflicts on standards and specifications
Revised:  Immaturity specification of USB 3.0 is the main reason that the Intel unreleased the actual standard of USB 3.0. Nick Knupffer, Spokesperson of Intel, finally claimed that Intel will release related technical specifications on USB 3.0 for the information technology industry to prevent unnecessary conflicts on standards and specifications
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Original:  Immaturity specification of USB 3.0 is the main reason that the Intel unreleased the actual standard of USB 3.0. Nick Knupffer, Spokesperson of Intel, finally claimed that Intel will release related technological specifications on USB 3.0 for the information technology industry to prevent unnecessary conflicts on standards and specifications
Revised:  Immaturity specification of USB 3.0 is the main reason that the Intel unreleased the actual standard of USB 3.0. Nick Knupffer, Spokesperson of Intel, finally claimed that Intel will release related technological specifications on USB 3.0 for the Information Technology industry to prevent unnecessary conflicts on standards and specifications
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Original:  Even though the USB 3.0 standard with speeds nearing 5GB/s transmission has not yet matured and is not expected until 2009 or 2010, chipset leaders Intel, AMD, and nVidia are battling to take the lead on the USB 3.0 specifications.
Revised:  Even though the USB 3.0 standard , with transmission speeds nearing 5GB/s transmission has not yet matured and is not expected until 2009 or 2010, chipset leaders Intel, AMD, and nVidia are battling to take the lead on the USB 3.0 specifications.
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Original:  Even though the USB 3.0 standard with speeds nearing 5GB/s transmission has not yet matured and is not expected until 2009 or 2010, chipset leaders Intel, AMD, and nVidia are battling to take the lead on the USB 3.0 specifications.
Revised:  Even though the USB 3.0 standard with speeds nearing 5GB/s , has not yet matured and is not expected until 2009 or 2010, chipset leaders Intel, AMD, and nVidia are battling to take the lead on the USB 3.0 specifications.
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Original:  Even though the USB 3.0 standard with speeds nearing 5GB/s transmission has not yet matured and is not expected until 2009 or 2010, chipset leaders Intel, AMD, and nVidia are battling to take the lead on the USB 3.0 specifications.
Revised:  Even though the USB 3.0 standard with speeds nearing 5GB/s transmission has not yet matured and is not expected until 2009 or 2010, technology leaders Intel, AMD, and nVidia are battling to take the lead on the USB 3.0 specifications.
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Original:  As of this issue, we [the Federal Trade Commission] decided to investigate Intel on monopolizing the specification of USB 3.0 and hope this conflict can be smoothly solved." stated Federal Trade Commission  .
Revised:  As of this issue, we [the Federal Trade Commission] decided to investigate Intel on monopolizing the specification of USB 3.0 and hope this conflict can be smoothly solved." said the Federal Trade Commission .
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Original:  As of this issue, we [the Federal Trade Commission] decided to investigate Intel on monopolizing the specification of USB 3.0 and hope this conflict can be smoothly solved." stated Federal Trade Commission  .
Revised:  As of this issue, we [the Federal Trade Commission] decided to investigate Intel on monopolizing the specification of USB 3.0 and hope this conflict can be smoothly solved." stated Federal Trade Commission in a statement .
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Original:  Even though the USB 3.0 standard, with transmission speeds nearing 5GB /s, has not yet matured and is not expected until 2009 or 2010, technology leaders Intel, AMD, and nVidia are battling to take the lead on the USB 3.0 specifications.
Revised:  Even though the USB 3.0 standard, with transmission speeds nearing 5GBit /s, has not yet matured and is not expected until 2009 or 2010, technology leaders Intel, AMD, and nVidia are battling to take the lead on the USB 3.0 specifications.
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Original: A USB line .
Revised: A USB cable with male type "A" connector .
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Original: At the 2008 edition of the NHL entry draft in Ottawa, Steven Stamkos ' long-anticipated selection first overall by the Tampa Bay Lightning may have been overshadowed by numerous trades and signings made on the draft floor.
Revised: At the in , ' long-anticipated selection first overall by the Tampa Bay Lightning may have been overshadowed by numerous trades and signings made on the draft floor.
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Original:  Before even the first pick was made, the Calgary Flames had acquired Mike Cammalleri in a three-way trade.
Revised:  Before even the first pick was made, the had acquired in a three-way trade.
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Original:  Calgary's pick, 17th overall was traded with the Los Angeles Kings ' pick, 28th overall, to the Anaheim Ducks .
Revised:  Calgary's pick, 17th overall was traded with the ' pick, 28th overall, to the Anaheim Ducks .
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Original:  Calgary's pick, 17th overall was traded with the Los Angeles Kings ' pick, 28th overall, to the Anaheim Ducks .
Revised:  Calgary's pick, 17th overall was traded with the Los Angeles Kings ' pick, 28th overall, to the .
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Original:  Later, the Flames shipped forward Alex Tanguay and fifth-round pick to the Montreal Canadiens for the 25th overall selection and a 2009 second-round pick.
Revised:  Later, the Flames shipped forward and fifth-round pick to the Montreal Canadiens for the 25th overall selection and a 2009 second-round pick.
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Original:  Later, the Flames shipped forward Alex Tanguay and fifth-round pick to the Montreal Canadiens for the 25th overall selection and a 2009 second-round pick.
Revised:  Later, the Flames shipped forward Alex Tanguay and fifth-round pick to the for the 25th overall selection and a 2009 second-round pick.
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Original:  After Stamkos was picked first overall, the next four picks, Drew Doughty, Zach Bogosian, Alex Pietrangelo, and Luke Schenn were all blueliners.
Revised:  After Stamkos was picked first overall, the next four picks, , , , and were all blueliners.
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Original:  The hosts, w:Ottawa Senators , also made numerous moves.
Revised:  The hosts, , also made numerous moves.
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Original:  The Senators traded up to the 15th pick overall to draft Erik Karlsson . Earlier in the day, the had also resigned Chris Kelly to a four-year, $8.5 million contract extension.
Revised:  The Senators traded up to the 15th pick overall to draft . Earlier in the day, the had also resigned Chris Kelly to a four-year, $8.5 million contract extension.
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Original:  Previously, the Senators also waived goaltender Ray Emery . Emery could be bought out as early as today.
Revised:  Previously, the Senators also waived goaltender . Emery could be bought out as early as today.
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Original:  3 Zach Bogosian (D)
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Original:  4 Alex Pietrangelo (D)
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Original:  Canada St. Louis Blues Niagara IceDogs (OHL)
Revised:  Canada (OHL)
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Original:  5 Luke Schenn (D)
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Original:  Kelowna Rockets (WHL ) 6 Nikita Filatov (LW)
Revised:  ( ) 6 Nikita Filatov (LW)
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Original:  Boston University (NCAA ) 8 Mikkel Boedker (LW)
Revised:  ( ) 8 Mikkel Boedker (LW)
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Original:  Boston University (NCAA ) 8 Mikkel Boedker (LW)
Revised:  Boston University (NCAA ) 8 (LW)
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Original:  9 Josh Bailey (C)
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Original:  Canada New York Islanders (from Nashville via Florida)
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL)
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Original:  10 Cody Hodgson (C)
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Original:  Canada Vancouver Canucks Brampton Battalion (OHL)
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Original:  11 Kyle Beach (LW)
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Original:  Canada Chicago Blackhawks Everett Silvertips (WHL)
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Original:  12 Tyler Myers (D)
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Original:  Canada Buffalo Sabres (from Edmonton via Anaheim via Los Angeles)
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Original:  13 Colten Teubert (D)
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Original:  Regina Pats (WHL)
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Original:  14 Zach Boychuk (C)
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Original:  Canada Carolina Hurricanes Lethbridge Hurricanes (WHL)
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Original:  15 Erik Karlsson (D)
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Original:  Frölunda HC (Elitserien ) 16 Joe Colborne (LW)
Revised:  ( ) 16 Joe Colborne (LW)
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Original:  Frölunda HC (Elitserien ) 16 Joe Colborne (LW)
Revised:  Frölunda HC (Elitserien ) 16 (LW)
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Original:  Canada Boston Bruins Camrose Kodiaks (AJHL ) 17 Jake Gardiner (D)
Revised:  Canada ( ) 17 Jake Gardiner (D)
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Original:  Minnetonka High School (USHS-Minnesota ) 18 Chet Pickard (G)
Revised:  ( ) 18 Chet Pickard (G)
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Original:  Tri-City Americans (WHL)
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Original:  19 Luca Sbisa (D)
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Original:  20 Michael Del Zotto (D)
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Original:  Canada New York Rangers Oshawa Generals (OHL)
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Original:  21 Anton Gustafsson (C)
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Original:  22 Jordan Eberle (C)
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Original:  Canada Edmonton Oilers (from Anaheim)
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Original:  23 Tyler Cuma (D)
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Original:  Ottawa 67's (OHL)
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Original:  24 Mattias Tedenby (LW)
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Original:  HV71 (Elitserien)
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) ( ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) ( ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Detroit Red Wings Guelph Storm (OHL
Revised:  Windsor Spitfires (OHL) 26 Tyler Ennis (C) Canada Buffalo Sabres (from San Jose) Medicine Hat Tigers (WHL) 27 John Carlson (D) USA Washington Capitals (from Philadelphia) Indiana Ice (USHL ) 28 Viktor Tikhonov (RW) Russia Phoenix Coyotes (from Dallas via Los Angeles via Anaheim) Severstal Cherepovets (RSL) 29 Daultan Leveille (C) Canada Atlanta Thrashers (from Pittsburgh) St. Catharines Falcons (OHA ) 30 Thomas McCollum (G) USA Guelph Storm (OHL
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Original:  However, he did say that the airline was likely unable to make urgent improvements suggested by the CAA in a safety audit last month because they were too preocupied with dealing with the disaster's aftermath    
Revised:  However, he did say that the airline was likely unable to make urgent improvements suggested by the CAA in a safety audit last month because they were too preocupied with dealing with the disaster's aftermath . 
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Original:  His nomination was immediately criticized by left-wing politicians, as well by the centrist Union for French Democracy, a junior partner in the ruling coalition, as a continuation of the same failed policies;
Revised:  His nomination was immediately criticized by left-wing politicians, as well as by the center-right Union for French Democracy, a junior partner in the ruling coalition, as a continuation of the same failed policies;
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Original: There are questions whether Mr.  Villepin, who has never held elected office and has ascended mostly as a Chirac aide, will be received by the population and by the parliamentary majority.
Revised: There are questions whether Mr. de Villepin, who has never held elected office and has ascended mostly as a Chirac aide, will be received by the population and by the parliamentary majority.
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Original: There are questions whether Mr.  Villepin, who has never held elected office and has ascended mostly as a Chirac aide, will be received by the population and by the parliamentary majority.
Revised: There are questions whether Mr. Villepin, who has never held elected office and has ascended mostly as a Chirac aide, will be well-received by the population and by the parliamentary majority.
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Original:  Poison claim the two companies have underpaid them royalties for years   
Revised:  Poison claim the two companies have underpaid them royalties for years . 
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Original: Netherlands defeated to the Russia national football team in a quarter-final match of UEFA Euro 2008.
Revised: Netherlands defeated the Russia national football team in a quarter-final match of UEFA Euro 2008.
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Original:  Roman Pavlyuchenko opened the goal count in main play which was equated by Ruud van Nistelrooy only after 30 minutes.
Revised:  Roman Pavlyuchenko opened the scoring in main play which was equated by Ruud van Nistelrooy only after 30 minutes.
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Original:  Roman Pavlyuchenko opened the goal count in main play which was equated by Ruud van Nistelrooy only after 30 minutes.
Revised:  Roman Pavlyuchenko opened the goal count in main play , a goal that was matched by Ruud van Nistelrooy only after 30 minutes.
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Original:  Roman Pavlyuchenko opened the goal count in main play which was equated by Ruud van Nistelrooy only after 30 minutes.
Revised:  Roman Pavlyuchenko opened the goal count in main play which was equated by Ruud van Nistelrooy after only 30 minutes.
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Original:  Then it was a hardy play-off for both teams, especially the Dutch, but Torbinsky and Arshavin 's final goals effectively put an ending dot
Revised:  Then it was a hardy play-off for both teams, especially the Dutch, but Torbinsky and Arshavin scored goals, effectively put an ending dot
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