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Original:  "As a result, Professor Reiss and the Royal Society have agreed that, in the best interests of the society, he will step down immediately as director of education  " They went on to say: "However, if a young person raises creationism in a science class, teachers should be in a position to explain why evolution is a sound scientific theory and why creationism is not, in any way, scientific."
Revised:  "As a result, Professor Reiss and the Royal Society have agreed that, in the best interests of the society, he will step down immediately as director of education " The Royal Society went on to say: "However, if a young person raises creationism in a science class, teachers should be in a position to explain why evolution is a sound scientific theory and why creationism is not, in any way, scientific."
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Original:  The Nasaq index has fallen by -3.16\% to 2138.14, while the Dax was 1.75\% lower than the start of the day at 16:08 UTC.
Revised:  The Nasdaq index has fallen by -3.16\% to 2138.14, while the Dax was 1.75\% lower than the start of the day at 16:08 UTC.
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Original:  The Nasdaq index has fallen by -3.16\% to 2138.14, while the Dax was 1.75\% lower than the start of the day at 16:08 UTC.
Revised:  The Nasdaq index has fallen by -3.16\% to 2138.14, while the Dax was 1.75\% lower than the start of the day as of 16:08 UTC.
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Original:  This  due to the ongoing events in the financial world, including the bailout of large insurance firm AIG by the US Federal Reserve.
Revised:  This is due to the ongoing events in the financial world, including the bailout of large insurance firm AIG by the US Federal Reserve.
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Original:  The Nasdaq index has fallen by -3.16 \% to 2138.14, while the Dax was 1.75\% lower than the start of the day as of 16:08 UTC.
Revised:  The Nasdaq index has fallen by 3.16 \% to 2138.14, while the Dax was 1.75\% lower than the start of the day as of 16:08 UTC.
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Original: Stock markets around the world, particurly those in the United States, have fallen dramatically today.
Revised: Stock markets around the world, particularly those in the United States, have fallen dramatically today.
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Original:  A lot of todays activities in the market were related to the takeover of the American International Group (AIG) on Tuesday in an US$ 85 billion loan, in exchange for a 79.9\% stake in the company.
Revised:  A lot of today's activities in the market were related to the takeover of the American International Group (AIG) on Tuesday in an US$ 85 billion loan, in exchange for a 79.9\% stake in the company.
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Original:  This is due to the ongoing events in the financial world, including the bailout of large insurance firm AIG by the US Federal Reserve .
Revised:  This is due to the ongoing events in the financial world, including the bailout of large insurance firm by the US Federal Reserve .
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Original:  This is due to the ongoing events in the financial world, including the bailout of large insurance firm AIG by the US Federal Reserve .
Revised:  This is due to the ongoing events in the financial world, including the bailout of large insurance firm AIG by the US .
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Original:  The Dow Jones , was down 2.62\% at 16:08 UTC , a slight increase from earlier today.
Revised:  The , was down 2.62\% at 16:08 UTC , a slight increase from earlier today.
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Original:  The Dow Jones , was down 2.62\% at 16:08 UTC , a slight increase from earlier today.
Revised:  The Dow Jones , was down 2.62\% at 16:08 , a slight increase from earlier today.
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Original:  The Japanese index, the Nikkei was one of the few to rise in value over the day.
Revised:  The Japanese index, the was one of the few to rise in value over the day.
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Original:  In addition, the markets have also had difficulties during the past week after the refusal of the Federal Reserve to bail out Lehman Brothers , forcing the company to file for bankruptcy on Monday after Bank of America (BoA) and Barclays PLC pulled out of negotiations over the weekend
Revised:  In addition, the markets have also had difficulties during the past week after the refusal of the Federal Reserve to bail out , forcing the company to file for bankruptcy on Monday after Bank of America (BoA) and Barclays PLC pulled out of negotiations over the weekend
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Original:  In addition, the markets have also had difficulties during the past week after the refusal of the Federal Reserve to bail out Lehman Brothers , forcing the company to file for bankruptcy on Monday after Bank of America (BoA) and Barclays PLC pulled out of negotiations over the weekend
Revised:  In addition, the markets have also had difficulties during the past week after the refusal of the Federal Reserve to bail out Lehman Brothers , forcing the company to file for bankruptcy on Monday after (BoA) and Barclays PLC pulled out of negotiations over the weekend
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Original:  In addition, the markets have also had difficulties during the past week after the refusal of the Federal Reserve to bail out Lehman Brothers , forcing the company to file for bankruptcy on Monday after Bank of America (BoA) and Barclays PLC pulled out of negotiations over the weekend
Revised:  In addition, the markets have also had difficulties during the past week after the refusal of the Federal Reserve to bail out Lehman Brothers , forcing the company to file for bankruptcy on Monday after Bank of America (BoA) and pulled out of negotiations over the weekend
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Original:  Tarja Tuurunen , a Finnish symphonic rock artist best known for being the former frontwoman of symphonic power metal band Nightwish, has been scheduled to appear at the 25th anniversary concert of heavy metal vocalist Doro Pesch.
Revised:  Tarja Turunen , a Finnish symphonic rock artist best known for being the former frontwoman of symphonic power metal band Nightwish, has been scheduled to appear at the 25th anniversary concert of heavy metal vocalist Doro Pesch.
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Original:  The Nasaq index has fallen by -3.16\% to 2138.14, while the Dax was 1.75\% lower than the start of the day at 16:08 UTC  
Revised:  The Nasaq index has fallen by -3.16\% to 2138.14, while the Dax was 1.75\% lower than the start of the day at 16:08 UTC . 
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Original: Before the suspension, the RTS exchange fell by 6.39 percent in just two hours, while the MICEX index stated the day with an increase, before falling again.
Revised: Before the suspension, the RTS exchange fell by 6.39 percent in just two hours, while the MICEX index started the day with an increase, before falling again.
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Original:  "It took too long for the money to get into the system," said said Uralsib analyst Chris Weafer commenting on this decision.
Revised:  "It took too long for the money to get into the system," said Uralsib analyst Chris Weafer commenting on this decision.
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Original:  The primary UK index, the FTSE 100, dropped in value by 2.36\%, which is 118.40 points, to below the 5000 mark at 4907.20.
Revised:  The primary British index, the FTSE 100, dropped in value by 2.36\%, which is 118.40 points, to below the 5000 mark at 4907.20.
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Original:  The McDonnel-Douglas MD-82  was lost at Madrid's Barajas Airport in Spanair's first and only fatal accident, with 154 lives lost.
Revised:  The McDonnel-Douglas MD-82 that was lost at Madrid's Barajas Airport in Spanair's first and only fatal accident, with 154 lives lost.
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Original:  The report goes on to note that after a similar accident befell Northwest Airlines Flight 255 in the United States in 1987, also with 154 dead, manufacturer McDonnel-Douglas (since merged with Boeing) told operators of MD-82s that they reccomended pilots verified the alarm system was operational before every takeoff.
Revised:  The report goes on to note that after a similar accident befell Northwest Airlines Flight 255 in the United States in 1987, also with 154 dead, manufacturer McDonnel-Douglas (since merged with Boeing) told operators of MD-82s that they recommended pilots verified the alarm system was operational before every takeoff.
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Original:  Smoke rises after the crash Spanair's director of operations, Javier Muela, has responded by denial that the primary cause of the crah was the alarm's failure, as was implied by the report.
Revised:  Smoke rises after the crash Spanair's director of operations, Javier Muela, has responded by denial that the primary cause of the crash was the alarm's failure, as was implied by the report.
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Original:  He did confirm that the airline was not following the reccomendation from the airframer, but in his defense said that "Spanair did not exist" at the time - "it was made in 87, Spanair was founded in 88," he said.
Revised:  He did confirm that the airline was not following the recommendation from the airframer, but in his defense said that "Spanair did not exist" at the time - "it was made in 87, Spanair was founded in 88," he said.
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Original:  He also said the airline's independant experts did not believe the reports claims about the incorrect flap position was accurate.
Revised:  He also said the airline's independent experts did not believe the reports claims about the incorrect flap position was accurate.
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Original:  The McDonnel-Douglas MD-82 that was lost at Madrid's Barajas Airport in Spanair's first and only fatal accident, with 154 lives lost.
Revised:  The McDonnel-Douglas MD-82 that was lost at Madrid's Barajas Airport in Spanair's first and only fatal accident, resulting in the deaths of 154.
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Original:  The McDonnel-Douglas MD-82 that was lost at Madrid's Barajas Airport in Spanair's first and only fatal accident , resulting in the deaths of 154.
Revised:  The McDonnel-Douglas MD-82 that was lost at Madrid's Barajas Airport in Spanair's first and only fatal accident resulted in the deaths of 154.
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Original:  Controversy has come as a result of both the document' s contents and the fact that it was leaked at all.
Revised:  Controversy has come as a result of both the documents' contents and the fact that it was leaked at all.
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Original: The jet before it crash Spain's Ministry for Development has leaked a preliminary report into the crash of Spanair Flight 5022.
Revised: The jet before it crashed Spain's Ministry for Development has leaked a preliminary report into the crash of Spanair Flight 5022.
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Original: Typically, airliners come with documents detailing operating reccomendations among other details, but newspapers have not confirmed that Spanair did in fact receive this information with any of its MD-82s.
Revised: Typically, airliners come with documents detailing operating recommendations among other details, but newspapers have not confirmed that Spanair did in fact receive this information with any of its MD-82s.
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Original:  The union say the ministry broke both protocols on confidentiality and the law.
Revised:  The union say the ministry broke protocols on both confidentiality and law.
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Original:  The McDonnel-Douglas MD-82 that was lost at Madrid's Barajas Airport in Spanair's first and only fatal accident resulted in the deaths of 154.
Revised:  The McDonnel-Douglas MD-82 that was lost at 's in Spanair's first and only fatal accident resulted in the deaths of 154.
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Original:  The plane had been taken to Madrid from Barcelona earlier that day with the same flight crew, and therefore the pilots were not expected to check the alarm.
Revised:  The plane had been taken to Madrid from earlier that day with the same flight crew, and therefore the pilots were not expected to check the alarm.
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Original:  Smoke rises after the crash Spanair's director of operations, Javier Muela, has responded by denial that the primary cause of the crash was the alarm's failure, as was implied by the report.
Revised:  Spanair's director of operations, Javier Muela, has responded by denial that the primary cause of the crash was the alarm's failure, as was implied by the report.
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Original: John Kerry's Yale transcript was released as a part of his naval records late last month, and it shows that Kerry's grades were approximately the same as those of George W. Bush.
Revised: John Kerry's Yale transcript was released as a part of his naval records late last month, and it shows that Kerry's grades were of lesser quality than thosee of George W. Bush.
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Original:  Kerry earned a 76  cumulative average during his four years at Yale, while Bush earned a 77  his first three years and a similar average his fourth year under a non-numerical grading system.
Revised:  Kerry earned a 76 percent cumulative average during his four years at Yale, while Bush earned a 77 his first three years and a similar average his fourth year under a non-numerical grading system.
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Original:  Kerry earned a 76  cumulative average during his four years at Yale, while Bush earned a 77  his first three years and a similar average his fourth year under a non-numerical grading system.
Revised:  Kerry earned a 76 cumulative average during his four years at Yale, while Bush earned a 77 percent his first three years and a similar average his fourth year under a non-numerical grading system.
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Original: John Kerry's Yale transcript was released as a part of his naval records late last month , and it shows that Kerry's grades were of lesser quality than those of George W. Bush  . Bush's transcript was published in 1999 by The New Yorker.
Revised: John Kerry's Yale transcript was released as a part of his naval records late last month , and it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush . Bush's transcript was published in 1999 by The New Yorker.
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Original: Much of the right-wing media have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
Revised: Many of the American right-wing media have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
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Original: Much of the right-wing media have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
Revised: Much of the right-wing new sources have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
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Original: Many of the American right-wing new sources have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
Revised: Many of the American right-wing news sources have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
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Original:  This is contrary to popular perception, in which Kerry is an "intellectual" and Bush is a "regular guy".
Revised:  This is contrary to popular perception, which portrays Kerry as an "intellectual" and Bush is a "regular guy".
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Original:  This is contrary to popular perception, in which Kerry is an "intellectual" and Bush is a "regular guy".
Revised:  This is contrary to popular perception, in which Kerry is an "intellectual" and Bush as a "regular guy".
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Original: John Kerry's Yale transcript was released as a part of his naval records late last month  Many of the American right-wing news sources have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
Revised: John Kerry's Yale transcript was released as a part of his naval records late last month . Many of the American right-wing news sources have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
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Original: John Kerry's Yale transcript was released as a part of his naval records late last month  Many of the American right-wing news sources have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
Revised: John Kerry's Yale transcript was released as a part of his naval records late last month A number of American right-wing news sources have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
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Original: A number of American right-wing news sources have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
Revised: A number of American news sources have drawn attention to the fact it shows that Kerry's grades were slightly lower than George W. Bush's.
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Original: A more diverse approach than solely a "Carbon Tax" is proposed in the Green Party's platform, which presents an almost holistic approach of adherence to the Kyoto obligations,  Cap and trade  of carbon emissions, industry development with both green technology R&D and regulation as well as consumer subsidies, and their own version of a carbon tax.
Revised: A more diverse approach than solely a "Carbon Tax" is proposed in the Green Party's platform, which presents an almost holistic approach of adherence to the Kyoto obligations, " Cap and trade of carbon emissions, industry development with both green technology R&D and regulation as well as consumer subsidies, and their own version of a carbon tax.
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Original: A more diverse approach than solely a "Carbon Tax" is proposed in the Green Party's platform, which presents an almost holistic approach of adherence to the Kyoto obligations,  Cap and trade  of carbon emissions, industry development with both green technology R&D and regulation as well as consumer subsidies, and their own version of a carbon tax.
Revised: A more diverse approach than solely a "Carbon Tax" is proposed in the Green Party's platform, which presents an almost holistic approach of adherence to the Kyoto obligations, Cap and trade " of carbon emissions, industry development with both green technology R&D and regulation as well as consumer subsidies, and their own version of a carbon tax.
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Original: NDP Examining the platforms of the New Democratic Party regarding air pollution and global warming as available on their website, one is struck by a lack of substance.
Revised:  Examining the platforms of the New Democratic Party regarding air pollution and global warming as available on their website, one is struck by a lack of substance.
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Original:  Liberal In June of 2008 the Liberals tabled a plan, the Green Shift, which they claim would reduce Canada's greenhouse gas emissions 20\% under 1990 emissions - well below the 6\% required by Canadian law when Canada ratified the Kyoto Accord - by 2020, which is rather after the 2008-2012 phase-in period required by that same law.
Revised:  In June of 2008 the Liberals tabled a plan, the Green Shift, which they claim would reduce Canada's greenhouse gas emissions 20\% under 1990 emissions - well below the 6\% required by Canadian law when Canada ratified the Kyoto Accord - by 2020, which is rather after the 2008-2012 phase-in period required by that same law.
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Original:  Green Party A more diverse approach than solely a "Carbon Tax" is proposed in the Green Party's platform, which presents an almost holistic approach of adherence to the Kyoto obligations, "Cap and trade" of carbon emissions, industry development with both green technology R&D and regulation as well as consumer subsidies, and their own version of a carbon tax.
Revised:  A more diverse approach than solely a "Carbon Tax" is proposed in the Green Party's platform, which presents an almost holistic approach of adherence to the Kyoto obligations, "Cap and trade" of carbon emissions, industry development with both green technology R&D and regulation as well as consumer subsidies, and their own version of a carbon tax.
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Original:  Conservative Such an approach appears to be anathema to the Conservatives, whose mantra since their election has been that Kyoto cannot be complied with without forcing an economic recession on the country, and used the Throne Speech of 2007 to reiterate that position.
Revised:  Such an approach appears to be anathema to the Conservatives, whose mantra since their election has been that Kyoto cannot be complied with without forcing an economic recession on the country, and used the Throne Speech of 2007 to reiterate that position.
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Original:  Bloc Québécois In contrast to the laundry-list of unconnected initiatives on the Conservative's website, the clean platform pamphlet created by the Bloc Québécois makes a simple and apparently heartfelt statement on the environment: La lutte aux changements climatiques est devenue un enjeu fondamental pour l’humanité et le Québec est déterminé à apporter sa contribution, à sa façon.
Revised:  In contrast to the laundry-list of unconnected initiatives on the Conservative's website, the clean platform pamphlet created by the Bloc Québécois makes a simple and apparently heartfelt statement on the environment: La lutte aux changements climatiques est devenue un enjeu fondamental pour l’humanité et le Québec est déterminé à apporter sa contribution, à sa façon.
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Original:  With sketchy platforms regarding environmental issues, it's no wonder some of the parties have turned to the subject of economics in recent days
Revised:  There seems to be a wide if somewhat shallow interest in the electorate as to just what each party is offering on the environmental file. But with sketchy platforms regarding environmental issues, it's no wonder some of the parties have turned to the subject of economics in recent days
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Original: Late term pregnancy flu shots continue to protect newborns after birth, according to a study published  in the New England Journal of Medicine on September 17.
Revised: Late term pregnancy flu shots continue to protect newborns after birth, according to a study published in the New England Journal of Medicine .
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Original:  To help with this, starting on October 1  will lower the export duty on oil, saving Russian oil companies around US$ 5.5 billion
Revised:  To help with this, starting on October 1 regulators will lower the export duty on oil, saving Russian oil companies around US$ 5.5 billion
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Original: President Dimitry Mendvedev went on national television to appease the public.
Revised: President Dmitry Medvedev went on national television to appease the public.
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Original:  Finance Minister Alexei Kudri announced that 500 billion rubles (US$ 19.7 billion) would be infused into the stock markets when they opened on Friday, with half of that amount coming from the federal budget.
Revised:  Finance Minister Alexei Kudrin announced that 500 billion rubles (US$ 19.7 billion) would be infused into the stock markets when they opened on Friday, with half of that amount coming from the federal budget.
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Original: The Russian government has continued to hold all stock markets closed until Friday, including  MICEX and RTS exchanges.
Revised: The Russian government has continued to hold all stock markets closed until Friday, including the MICEX and RTS exchanges.
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Original:  To help with this, starting on October 1 regulators will lower the export duty on oil, saving Russian oil companies around US$ 5.5 billion . Related news%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Russian stock markets suspended amid market turmoi
Revised:  To help with this, starting on October 1 regulators will lower the export duty on oil, saving Russian oil companies around US$ 5.5 billion Related news%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Russian stock markets suspended amid market turmoi
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