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Original:  7 \% felt responsible for the death of Canadian or ally personnel, and 38 \% had difficulty distinguishing between combatants and noncombatants.
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Original:  Approximately 27 \% of deployed soldiers have reported having an ethical dilemma to which they did not know how to respond.
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Original:  The concept of moral injury in healthcare is the expansion of the discussion around compassion fatigue and 'burnout' was first discussed by Dr. Simon G. Talbot and Dr.
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Original:  The concept of moral injury in healthcare is the expansion of the discussion around compassion fatigue and 'burnout' was first discussed by Dr. Simon G. Talbot and Dr.
Revised:  The concept of moral injury in healthcare is the expansion of the discussion around compassion fatigue and 'burnout' was first discussed by Dr. Simon G. Talbot and 
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Original:  Often, physicians are trained to the 'gold standard' but due to institutional double-binds, can't actually execute that best-in-class treatment.
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Original:  In her TED talk in October 2019, Dr Sammy Batt-Rawden argued that doctors come to psychological harm as a result of not being able to give patients the care that they need in an under-resourced NHS.
Revised:  In her TED talk in October 2019, Sammy Batt-Rawden argued that doctors come to psychological harm as a result of not being able to give patients the care that they need in an under-resourced NHS.
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Original: The Revolutionary Nationalist Movement ( , MNR) is a right-wing political party in Bolivia and the leading force behind the Bolivian National Revolution.
Revised: The Revolutionary Nationalist Movement ( , MNR) is a political party in Bolivia and the leading force behind the Bolivian National Revolution.
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Original:  Category:History of Bolivia Category:Right-wing parties Category:National conservative parti
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Original: At the time of its establishment it was a leftist/reformist party, along the lines of similar Latin American parties such as the Dominican Revolutionary Party, Democratic Action in Venezuela, the Mexican Institutional Revolutionary Party,  the American Popular Revolutionary Alliance in Peru and the Dominican Revolutionary Party .
Revised: At the time of its establishment it was a leftist/reformist party, along the lines of similar Latin American parties such as the Dominican Revolutionary Party, Democratic Action in Venezuela, the Mexican Institutional Revolutionary Party, and the American Popular Revolutionary Alliance in Peru and the Dominican Revolutionary Party .
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Original: At the time of its establishment it was a leftist/reformist party, along the lines of similar Latin American parties such as the Dominican Revolutionary Party, Democratic Action in Venezuela, the Mexican Institutional Revolutionary Party,  the American Popular Revolutionary Alliance in Peru and the Dominican Revolutionary Party .
Revised: At the time of its establishment it was a leftist/reformist party, along the lines of similar Latin American parties such as the Dominican Revolutionary Party, Democratic Action in Venezuela, the Mexican Institutional Revolutionary Party, the American Popular Revolutionary Alliance in Peru .
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Original:  Among the party's most prominent supporters are historic figures such as Humberto Guzmán Fricke, Juan Lechín, Carlos Montenegro, Walter Guevara Arze, Javier del Granado  , Augusto Céspedes, Lydia Gueiler, Guillermo Bedregal, and Gonzalo Sánchez de Lozada, a number of whom later became presidents of Bolivia.
Revised:  Among the party's most prominent supporters were Humberto Guzmán Fricke, Juan Lechín, Carlos Montenegro, Walter Guevara Arze, Javier del Granado , Augusto Céspedes, Lydia Gueiler, Guillermo Bedregal, and Gonzalo Sánchez de Lozada, a number of whom later became presidents of Bolivia.
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Original:  Among the party's most prominent supporters were Humberto Guzmán Fricke, Juan Lechín, Carlos Montenegro, Walter Guevara Arze, Javier del Granado, Rogerio Prado Vargas, Augusto Céspedes, Lydia Gueiler, Guillermo Bedregal, and Gonzalo Sánchez de Lozada, a number of whom later became presidents of Bolivia.
Revised:  Among the party's most prominent supporters were Humberto Guzmán Fricke, Juan Lechín, Carlos Montenegro, Walter Guevara Arze, Javier del Granado, Augusto Céspedes, Lydia Gueiler, Guillermo Bedregal, and Gonzalo Sánchez de Lozada, a number of whom later became presidents of Bolivia.
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Original: The Sorby Research Institute was a research facility that operated in the UK around the time of the Second World War in Sheffield, England.
Revised: The Sorby Research Institute was a research facility that operated in the UK during and immediately after the Second World War in Sheffield, England.
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Original:  This was an important consideration in wartime Britain  where food was in short supply.
Revised:  This was an important consideration in wartime Britain , where food was in short supply.
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Original:  The volunteers were  conscientious objectors to military service.
Revised:  The volunteers were mainly conscientious objectors to military service.
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Original:  One of the first experiments was an investigation into scabies.
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Original:  Some volunteers had regular jobs outside the program , the rest were expected to carry out domestic tasks in the house.
Revised:  Some volunteers had regular jobs outside the programme , the rest were expected to carry out domestic tasks in the house.
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Original:  in early URL but left the club in May of that year and began hosting its events in non-traditional venues such as URL Mister Saturday Night offers an alternative nightlife experience that is "just as interested in constructing an engaging journey as they are in dropping good URL The party gives back to the community, announcing an initiative to donate ten percent of its annual net profits in 2014 to the Robin Hood Foundation, a poverty-fighting organization in New York.
Revised:  in early URL but left the club in May of that year and began hosting its events in non-traditional venues such as URL Mister Saturday Night offers an alternative nightlife experience that is "just as interested in constructing an engaging journey as they are in dropping good tunes." The party gives back to the community, announcing an initiative to donate ten percent of its annual net profits in 2014 to the Robin Hood Foundation, a poverty-fighting organization in New York.
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Original:  The first eleven releases were hand-stamped, vinyl-only EPs, and it is releasing a full-length album on featuring all the artists from the label on June URL Mister Saturday Night Records was voted Label to watch in 2014 by FACT Magazine.
Revised:  The first eleven releases were hand-stamped, vinyl-only EPs, and it is releasing a full-length album on featuring all the artists from the label on June 23. Mister Saturday Night Records was voted Label to watch in 2014 by FACT Magazine.
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Original:  The have been referred to as " " One of the city’s most accomplished DJ duos" by The Guardian ref></ref> .
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Original:  The have been referred to as " " One of the city’s most accomplished DJ duos" by The Guardian ref></ref> .
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Original:  The have been referred to as " One of the city’s most accomplished DJ duos" by The Guardian .
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Original: Eamon Harkin Eamon was born in the North of Ireland and moved to New York in 2004.
Revised: Eamon Harkin Eamon was born in Northern Ireland and moved to New York in 2004.
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Original: Mister Saturday Night is a recurring party based in Brooklyn, NY . It is organized and DJed by Eamon Harkin and Justin Carter.
Revised: Mister Saturday Night is a recurring party based in Brooklyn, New York . It is organized and DJed by Eamon Harkin and Justin Carter.
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Original:  The duo run an associated daytime, Sunday afternoon party called Mister Sunday.
Revised:  The duo also runs an associated Sunday afternoon party called Mister Sunday.
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Original:  Eamon Harkin Eamon was born in Northern Ireland and moved to New York in 2004.
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Original:  Eamon Harkin Eamon was born in Northern Ireland and moved to New York in 2004.
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Original:  He now produces Mister Saturday Night and Mister Sunday and DJs with his partner Justin Carter.
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Original:  As a producer, Eamon has released edits, remixes and original productions, on his own and with former partner Steve Raney (as Harkin and Raney).
Revised:  As a producer, Harkin has released edits, remixes and original productions, on his own and with former partner Steve Raney (as Harkin and Raney).
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Original:  Justin Carter Justin moved from North Carolina to New York in 1999.
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Original:  Justin has sung in the chorus of avant-garde composer Butch Morris and co-written and is currently working on an album of solo material.
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Original:  Athénor and Compagnie ACTA (France), HELIOS Theater and Theater o.N. (Germany), Replay Theatre (Northern Ireland), Teater Fot (Norway), Teatr Atofri (Poland), Companhia de Música Teatral (Portugal), Ion Creangă (Romania), Starcatchers and Catherine Wheels Theatre Company (Scotland), La Casa Incierta (Spain), Ögonblicksteatern and Unga Klara (Sweden), Imagination Stage, Children's Theatre Company of Minneapolis and Alliance Theatre for the Very Young ( USA ) and Theatr Iolo (Wales).
Revised:  Athénor and Compagnie ACTA (France), HELIOS Theater and Theater o.N. (Germany), Replay Theatre (Northern Ireland), Teater Fot (Norway), Teatr Atofri (Poland), Companhia de Música Teatral (Portugal), Ion Creangă (Romania), Starcatchers and Catherine Wheels Theatre Company (Scotland), La Casa Incierta (Spain), Ögonblicksteatern and Unga Klara (Sweden), Imagination Stage, Children's Theatre Company of Minneapolis and Alliance Theatre for the Very Young ( United States ) and Theatr Iolo (Wales).
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:16th Lok Sabha members Category:Bengali people Category:Bengali Hindus Category:Living people Category:People from Karimganj district Category:Lok Sabha members from Assam Category:All India United Democratic Front politicians Category:1954 birt
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Original:  He won the 2014 Indian general election being a All India United Democratic Front candidate.
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Original: Political career In the 2014 Lok Sabha election, the All India Trinamool Congress nominated Pratima Mandal from the Jaynagar Lok Sabha constituency.
Revised: Political career In the 2014 Lok Sabha election, the All India Trinamool Congress nominated Pratima Mondal from the Jaynagar Lok Sabha constituency.
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Original:  Her nearest rival Subhas Naskar of the Revolutionary Socialist Party got 3,86,362 votes , which was 32.58\% of the votes cast .
Revised:  She defeated her nearest rival Subhas Naskar of the Revolutionary Socialist Party got 3,86,362 votes , which was 32.58\% of the votes cast .
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Original:  Her nearest rival Subhas Naskar of the Revolutionary Socialist Party got 3,86,362 votes , which was 32.58\% of the votes cast .
Revised:  Her nearest rival Subhas Naskar of the Revolutionary Socialist Party by 3,86,362 votes , which was 32.58\% of the votes cast .
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Original:  Her nearest rival Subhas Naskar of the Revolutionary Socialist Party got 3,86,362 votes , which was 32.58\% of the votes cast .
Revised:  Her nearest rival Subhas Naskar of the Revolutionary Socialist Party got 3,86,362 votes .
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Original: An annual ,  peer-reviewed , academic journal , Mande Studies, is published by the University of Wisconsin  .
Revised: Mande Studies peer-reviewed , academic journal , Mande Studies, is published by the University of Wisconsin .
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Original: An annual ,  peer-reviewed , academic journal , Mande Studies, is published by the University of Wisconsin  .
Revised: An annual , Mande Studies is an annual peer-reviewed , academic journal , Mande Studies, is published by the University of Wisconsin .
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Original: HIA conferences The 13th International HIA Conference was held in Geneva in 2013.
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Original:  The 12th International HIA Conference was held in Québec City in 2012.
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Original: HIA worldwide HIA is currently being used or developed around the world, most notably in Europe, North America, Australia, New Zealand, Africa and Thailand .
Revised: HIA worldwide HIA used around the world, most notably in Europe, North America, Australia, New Zealand, Africa and Thailand .
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Original:  The new safeguard policies and standards of the International Finance Corporation (IFC), part of the World Bank, were established in 2006.
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Original:  This page uses Harvard referencing.
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Original: Reports This page uses Harvard referencing.
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Original:  Kierkegaard has been working toward creating a place for the concept of guilt and sin in the conscience of the single individual.
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Original:  Kierkegaard has been working toward creating a place for the concept of guilt and sin in the conscience of the single individual.
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Original:  Kierkegaard discussed the ideas generated by both Johann von Goethe and Friedrich Hegel concerning reason and nature.
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Original:  This book is his response to the idea that nature is perfect and that reason is perfect.
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Original: A peacekeeping mission of the Organization of African Unity (OAU), to be drawn from troops from Republic of the Congo, Guinea, and Benin, was to replace the French.
Revised: A peacekeeping mission of the Organisation of African Unity (OAU), to be drawn from troops from Republic of the Congo, Guinea, and Benin, was to replace the French.
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Original: People in interfaith dialogue Category:Muslim reformers Category:Bugis people Category:Indonesian imams Category:People from Bulukumba Regency Category:21st-century Muslim scholars of Islam Category:American Sunni Muslims Category:American Muslims Category:American people of Indonesian descent Category:American people of Bugis descent Category:American imams Category:Religious leaders from New York City Category:Indonesian emigrants to the United States Category:Indonesian Muslim activis
Revised: People in interfaith dialogue Category:Muslim reformers Category:Bugis people Category:Indonesian imams Category:People from Bulukumba Regency Category:21st-century Muslim scholars of Islam Category:American Sunni Muslim scholars of Islam Category:American people of Indonesian descent Category:American people of Bugis descent Category:American imams Category:Religious leaders from New York City Category:Indonesian emigrants to the United States Category:Indonesian Muslim activis
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Original:  Long Jinguang （left） and Long Jiguang （right）at Guangzhou 合影
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Original: Long Jinguang () (1863 – 1917) was an ethnic Hani Chinese general of the late Qing and early Republican period of China.
Revised: Long Jinguang () (1863 – 1917) was an ethnic Han Chinese general of the late Qing and early Republican period of China.
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Original:  Tang Xiangming in Navy uniform  References
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Original: Tang Xiangming ( ) ( 1885–1975) was a Chinese naval officer.
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Original:  In December 1915, he supported Yuan Shikai's creation of the Empire of China ( 1915-16 ).
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Original:  After Yuan's death, he supported the Zhili clique until their defeat by the Fengtian clique in the Second Zhili-Fengtian War in 1924.
Revised:  After Yuan's death, he supported the Zhili clique until their defeat by the Fengtian clique in the Second Zhili–Fengtian War in 1924.
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Original:  The selection shadow is a concept involved with the evolutionary theories of aging that states that selection pressures on an individual decrease as an individual ages and passes sexual maturity, resulting in a "shadow" of time where selective fitness is not considered.
Revised:  The selection shadow is a concept involved with the evolutionary theories of ageing that states that selection pressures on an individual decrease as an individual ages and passes sexual maturity, resulting in a "shadow" of time where selective fitness is not considered.
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Original: Medawar's Test Tube model Medawar used a test tube model to demonstrate his idea that explained that most animals will die before aging will be the ultimate cause for death in that animal.
Revised: Medawar's Test Tube model Medawar developed a theoretical model to demonstrate his idea that explained that most animals will die before aging will be the ultimate cause for death in that animal.
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Original: Medawar's Test Tube model Medawar used a test tube model to demonstrate his idea that explained that most animals will die before aging will be the ultimate cause for death in that animal.
Revised: Medawar's Test Tube model Medawar used a test tube model to demonstrate his thought process which explained that most animals will die before aging will be the ultimate cause for death in that animal.
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Original:  Medawar wanted to demonstrate this  by using test tubes to get his point across.
Revised:  Medawar wanted to demonstrate this possibility by using test tubes to get his point across.
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Original:  In his lab, he would gather test tubes to represent a population of species.
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Original:  If one of these test tubes broke , this would represent an individual animal dying.
Revised:  If one of these test tubes were to theoretically break , this would represent an individual animal dying.
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Original:  Medawar would replace the broken test tubes  with a new one, which represents a new animal being born into the population.
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Original:  Medawar would replace the broken test tubes  with a new one, which represents a new animal being born into the population.
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Original:  Overtime, Medawar noticed that test tubes over a certain age would decline in the population as new test tubes were put in.
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Original:  The selection shadow is a concept involved with the evolutionary theories of ageing that states that selection pressures on an individual decrease as an individual ages and passes sexual maturity, resulting in a "shadow" of time where selective fitness is not considered.
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Original: Criticism Some scientists, however, have criticized the idea of aging being non-adaptive, instead adopting the theory of " Death by Design ".
Revised: Criticism Some scientists, however, have criticized the idea of aging being non-adaptive, instead adopting the theory of " death by design ".
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Original:  He was a pioneer in writing the history of South Africa and later an important historian of the British Empire, though by the end of his life his work was seen as dated and Eurocentric .
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Original:  He produced a third edition of his history of South Africa in 1957 (retitled A history of Southern Africa) and edited the second edition of the South African volume of The Cambridge history of the British Empire, published in 1963.
Revised:  He produced a third edition of his history of South Africa in 1957 (retitled A History of Southern Africa) and edited the second edition of the South African volume of The Cambridge history of the British Empire, published in 1963.
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