wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: File:Trypanosoma cruzi crithidia.jpeg|File photo of trypanosoma brucei]] Research teams from the universities of Georgia and Glasgow discovered the mechanism the Trypanosome parasite evolved for 'sleeping sickness' disease to circumvent the human immune system.
Revised: File:Trypanosoma cruzi crithidia.jpeg|File photo of trypanosoma brucei]] Research teams from the universities of Georgia and Glasgow discovered the mechanism the Trypanosome parasite evolved for "sleeping sickness" disease to circumvent the human immune system.
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Original: ]] The 1998–2001 sleeping sickness epidemics in South Sudan, Angola, Democratic Republic of Congo  and Uganda caused tens of thousands of death .
Revised: ]] The 1998–2001 sleeping sickness epidemics in South Sudan, Angola, Democratic Republic of Congo , and Uganda caused tens of thousands of death .
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Original: ]] The 1998–2001 sleeping sickness epidemics in South Sudan, Angola, Democratic Republic of Congo  and Uganda caused tens of thousands of death .
Revised: ]] The 1998–2001 sleeping sickness epidemics in South Sudan, Angola, Democratic Republic of Congo and Uganda caused tens of thousands of deaths .
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Original:  It is considered one of the worst epidemics in  last five decades.
Revised:  It is considered one of the worst epidemics in the last five decades.
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Original:  However  the main effect of these measures being a decrease in spreading of the parasite and not in decrease of the death rate, the researchers decided to tackle the puzzle.
Revised:  However , the main effect of these measures being a decrease in spreading of the parasite and not in decrease of the death rate, the researchers decided to tackle the puzzle.
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Original:  The scientists studied the molecules  human immune system activates in response to the attack.
Revised:  The scientists studied the molecules the human immune system activates in response to the attack.
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Original:  Of the several known parasite species, the two which can infect human were chosen to study, called Trypanosoma brucei gambiense and Trypanosoma brucei rhodensiense.
Revised:  Of the several known parasite species, the two that can infect humans were chosen to study, called Trypanosoma brucei gambiense and Trypanosoma brucei rhodensiense.
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Original:  Several others also exist, but they are affecting only animals.
Revised:  Several others also exist, but they affect only animals.
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Original:  It is generated in the humans' immune system and is toxic to the parasites but not human .
Revised:  It is generated in the humans' immune system and is toxic to the parasites but not to humans .
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Original:  It doesn't bind to TLF-1 as well as it does for other species, leading to a substantial decrease in TLF-1 uptake by the parasite.
Revised:  It doesn't bind to TLF-1 as well as for other species, leading to a substantial decrease in TLF-1 uptake by the parasite.
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Original:  Basing on the results of the research, humans could possibly develop a defense mechanism to keep the parasites from evading the human defense system.
Revised:  Based on the results of the research, humans could possibly develop a defense mechanism to keep the parasites from evading the human defense system.
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Original:  The parasites are spread by tsetse flies , which are more or less difficult to eradicate at the territory .
Revised:  The parasites are spread by tsetse flies .
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Original:  After working as assistant director on L’Aveu with Costa Gavras he directed his first film in 1973, France, Inc  
Revised:  After working as assistant director on L’Aveu with Costa Gavras he directed his first film in 1973, France, Inc .. 
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Original:  Corneau said in a 1992 interview to the New York Times that “Many people got emotional about this film, and that made it possible for it to escape cult status  
Revised:  Corneau said in a 1992 interview to the New York Times that “Many people got emotional about this film, and that made it possible for it to escape cult status .” 
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Original:  He said "Corneau was a courageous man and a great director  
Revised:  He said "Corneau was a courageous man and a great director ." 
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Original: File:Alain Corneau FFF Yokohama 2005.jpg|Alain Corneau at the Yokohama French Film Festival in 2005]] Alain Corneau, the French film director has died at the age of 67.
Revised: File:Alain Corneau FFF Yokohama 2005.jpg|Alain Corneau at the Yokohama French Film Festival in 2005]] Alain Corneau, a French film director has died at the age of 67.
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Original:  Born on the 7th of August 1943  Corneau's first interest was music.
Revised:  Born on August 7, 1943 Corneau's first interest was music.
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Original:  Born on the 7th of August 1943  Corneau's first interest was music.
Revised:  Born on the 7th of August 1943 , Corneau's first interest was music.
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Original:  Before the success of his first film Corneau tried to make a documentary about New York and an adaption of a novel.
Revised:  Before the success of his first film , Corneau attempted to make a documentary about New York and an adaption of a novel.
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Original:  The Tous les matins du monde movie received 11 César Award nominations and won seven of them.
Revised:  Tous les matins du monde movie received 11 César Award nominations and won seven of them.
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Original:  The Tous les matins du monde movie received 11 César Award nominations and won seven of them.
Revised:  The Tous les matins du monde movie 11 César Award nominations and won seven of them.
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Original:  The awards included best film, best director and best music . Corneau said in a 1992 interview to the New York Times that "Many people got emotional about this film, and that made it possible for it to escape cult status."
Revised:  The awards included Best Film, Best Director and Best Music . Corneau said in a 1992 interview to the New York Times that "Many people got emotional about this film, and that made it possible for it to escape cult status."
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Original:  The awards included best film, best director and best music . Corneau said in a 1992 interview to the New York Times that "Many people got emotional about this film, and that made it possible for it to escape cult status."
Revised:  The awards included best film, best director and best music . Corneau said in a 1992 interview in the New York Times that "Many people got emotional about this film, and that made it possible for it to escape cult status."
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Original: File:Alain Corneau FFF Yokohama 2005.jpg|Alain Corneau at the Yokohama French Film Festival in 2005]] Alain Corneau, a French film director  has died at the age of 67.
Revised: File:Alain Corneau FFF Yokohama 2005.jpg|Alain Corneau at the Yokohama French Film Festival in 2005]] Alain Corneau, a French film director , has died at the age of 67.
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Original:  Before the success of his first film, Corneau attempted to make a documentary about New York and an adaption of a novel.
Revised:  Before the success of his first film, Corneau attempted to make a documentary about New York and an adaptation of a novel.
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Original:  After working as assistant director on L ’ Aveu with Costa Gavras he directed his first film in 1973, France, Inc. . Corneau's other films include La Menace, Fort Saganne  and the highly successful Tous les matins du monde.
Revised:  After working as assistant director on L ' Aveu with Costa Gavras he directed his first film in 1973, France, Inc. . Corneau's other films include La Menace, Fort Saganne and the highly successful Tous les matins du monde.
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Original:  After working as assistant director on L ’ Aveu with Costa Gavras he directed his first film in 1973, France, Inc. . Corneau's other films include La Menace, Fort Saganne  and the highly successful Tous les matins du monde.
Revised:  After working as assistant director on L ’ Aveu with Costa Gavras he directed his first film in 1973, France, Inc. Corneau's other films include La Menace, Fort Saganne and the highly successful Tous les matins du monde.
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Original:  After working as assistant director on L ’ Aveu with Costa Gavras he directed his first film in 1973, France, Inc. . Corneau's other films include La Menace, Fort Saganne  and the highly successful Tous les matins du monde.
Revised:  After working as assistant director on L ’ Aveu with Costa Gavras he directed his first film in 1973, France, Inc. . Corneau's other films include La Menace, Fort Saganne , and the highly successful Tous les matins du monde.
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Original:  Tous les matins du monde movie 11 César Award nominations and won seven of them.
Revised:  Tous les matins du monde received 11 César Award nominations and won seven of them.
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Original:  The awards included Best Film, Best Director  and Best Music.
Revised:  The awards included Best Film, Best Director , and Best Music.
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Original:  Of course, care should be taken to not ingest any of the flood water, but people with open wounds wading or swimming through the water might also be at risk for disease.
Revised:  Of course, care should be taken to not ingest any of the flood water, and people with open wounds wading or swimming through the water might also be at risk for disease.
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Original:  Of course, care should be taken to not ingest any of the flood water , and people with open wounds wading or swimming through the water might also be at risk for disease.
Revised:  Of course, care should be taken to not ingest any of the flood water . People with open wounds wading or swimming through the water might also be at risk for disease.
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Original:  While the threat of cholera, typhoid and other diseases is certainly increased by the contamination of the flood waters with sewage and corpses, many of the chemical companies located in or near New Orleans survived the storm without spilling dangerous contaminents into the water system .
Revised:  While the threat of cholera, typhoid and other diseases is certainly increased by the contamination of the flood waters with sewage and corpses, many of the chemical companies located in or near New Orleans survived the storm without spilling dangerous contaminants into the flood waters .
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Original:  People with open wounds wading or swimming through the water might also be at risk for disease.
Revised:  People with open wounds wading or swimming through the water may also be at risk for disease.
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Original:  People with open wounds wading or swimming through the water might also be at risk for disease.
Revised:  People with open wounds wading or swimming through the water might also be at risk of disease.
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Original:  Experts at Louisiana State University said that the sediments in the Mississippi River and Lake Ponchartrain are not heavily polluted and that the biggest risk of chemical contamination will come when the flood waters recede, leaving shallow pools where the water can evaporate, concentrating heavier chemical pollutants.
Revised:  Experts at Louisiana State University said that sediments in the Mississippi River and Lake Ponchartrain are not heavily polluted and that the biggest risk of chemical contamination will come when the flood waters recede, leaving shallow pools where the water can evaporate, concentrating heavier chemical pollutants.
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Original:  The widespread damage caused by the flooding is actually one of the factors in reducing the contamination, since the large amounts of water have diluted many of the contaminents .
Revised:  The widespread damage caused by the flooding is actually one of the factors in reducing the contamination, since the large amounts of water have diluted many of the contaminants .
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Original: Victims of hurrincane Katrina are being raped and beaten , fights and fires are out of control and corpses lay out in the open as New Orleans resembles a scene straight out of Dante's "Inferno" . “We have individuals who are getting raped, we have individuals who are getting beaten,”  Police Chief Eddie Compass said.
Revised: Victims of hurrincane Katrina are being raped and beaten , fights and fires were out of control and corpses lay out in the open as New Orleans resembles a scene straight out of Dante's "Inferno" . “We have individuals who are getting raped, we have individuals who are getting beaten,” Police Chief Eddie Compass said.
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Original: Victims of hurrincane Katrina are being raped and beaten , fights and fires are out of control and corpses lay out in the open as New Orleans resembles a scene straight out of Dante's "Inferno" . “We have individuals who are getting raped, we have individuals who are getting beaten,”  Police Chief Eddie Compass said.
Revised: Victims of hurrincane Katrina are being raped and beaten , fights and fires are out of control , leaving corpses laying in the open as New Orleans resembles a scene straight out of Dante's "Inferno" . “We have individuals who are getting raped, we have individuals who are getting beaten,” Police Chief Eddie Compass said.
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Original: Victims of hurrincane Katrina are being raped and beaten , fights and fires are out of control and corpses lay out in the open as New Orleans resembles a scene straight out of Dante's "Inferno" . “We have individuals who are getting raped, we have individuals who are getting beaten,”  Police Chief Eddie Compass said.
Revised: Victims of hurrincane Katrina are being raped and beaten , fights and fires are out of control and corpses lay out in the open as the city descended into anarchy . “We have individuals who are getting raped, we have individuals who are getting beaten,” Police Chief Eddie Compass said.
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Original: Victims of hurrincane Katrina are being raped and beaten , fights and fires are out of control and corpses lay out in the open as New Orleans resembles a scene straight out of Dante's "Inferno" . “We have individuals who are getting raped, we have individuals who are getting beaten,”  Police Chief Eddie Compass said.
Revised: Victims of hurrincane Katrina are being raped and beaten , fights and fires are out of control and corpses lay out in the open as New Orleans resembles a scene straight out of Dante's "Inferno" . “We have individuals who are getting raped, we have individuals who are getting beaten,” New Orleans Police Chief Eddie Compass said.
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Original:  Compass said that  15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he  sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
Revised:  Compass said that the 15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
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Original:  Compass said that  15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he  sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
Revised:  Compass said that 15,000 to 20,000 people who were at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
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Original:  Compass said that  15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he  sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
Revised:  Compass said that 15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses grew increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
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Original:  Compass said that  15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he  sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
Revised:  Compass said that 15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and had beat back 88 officers he sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
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Original:  Compass said that  15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he  sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
Revised:  Compass said that 15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he had sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
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Original:  Compass said that  15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he  sent there to try ,unsuccessfully, to gain control.
Revised:  Compass said that 15,000 to 20,000 people who are at the New Orleans convention center awaiting buses have grown increasingly hostile and an angry mob beat back 88 officers he sent there to try to keep the peace.
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Original:  “Tourists are walking in that direction and they are getting preyed upon.” Compass  said
Revised:  “Tourists are walking in that direction and they are getting preyed upon.” Compass had said
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Original: Reports of rampant violence though , may have been overblown, even by new Orleans standards, as many reports of sensational violence have not been verified.
Revised: Reports of rampant violence though may have been overblown, even by new Orleans standards, as many reports of sensational violence have not been verified.
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Original: Reports of rampant violence though , may have been overblown, even by new Orleans standards, as many reports of sensational violence have not been verified.
Revised: Reports of rampant violence though , may have been overblown, even by New Orleans standards, as many reports of sensational violence have not been verified.
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Original:  In 1961 he started to present "Heddiw " (Today ), the BBC's Welsh early evening news program.
Revised:  In 1961 he started to present Heddiw (‘Today’ ), the BBC's Welsh early evening news program.
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Original:  Under his control  both Radio Wales and Radio Cymru were launched.
Revised:  Under his control , both Radio Wales and Radio Cymru were launched.
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Original:  He left the post in 1981 to start on the idea of S4C, a Welsh language television station.
Revised:  He left the post in 1981 to found S4C, a Welsh language television station.
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Original:  In 2008  Edwards was presented with a special achievement award for his contributions to media.
Revised:  In 2008 , Edwards was presented with a special achievement award for his contributions to media.
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Original:  Menna Richards, the current director of BBC Wales  commented on Edwards death.
Revised:  Menna Richards, the current director of BBC Wales , commented on Edwards death.
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Original:  In 1961 he started to present Heddiw (‘Today’), the BBC's Welsh early evening news program.
Revised:  In 1961 he began presenting Heddiw (‘Today’), the BBC's Welsh early evening news program.
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Original:  In 1974  Edwards was made director of BBC Wales.
Revised:  In 1974 , Edwards was made director of BBC Wales.
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Original:  She said "his contribution to the development of the media in Wales was unsurpassed."
Revised:  She said , “He was a man who truly loved Wales, and his legacy to our nation's public life is rich and enduring.”
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Original:  Current S4C chair John Walter Jones said he was a "colossus of Welsh language broadcasting" and one of the nation's "great figures"
Revised:  Current S4C chair John Walter Jones said , “He managed to establish a Welsh language television service that was admired throughout the world.
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Original:  He left the show after five years in 1966.
Revised:  He took a role behind the camera in 1966.
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Original: Owen Edwards, the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C, died on Tueday at the age of 76.
Revised: Owen Edwards, the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C, has died at the age of 76.
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Original:  He worked on regional news programs and reported on such events as the Aberfan disaster.
Revised:  He worked on regional news programmes and reported on such events as the Aberfan disaster.
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Original:  Mr Edwards had suffered from Parkinson's Disease for over twenty years.
Revised:  Edwards had suffered from Parkinson's Disease for over twenty years.
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Original:  In 1961 he began presenting Heddiw (‘Today’), the BBC's Welsh early evening news program .
Revised:  In 1961 he began presenting Heddiw (‘Today’), the BBC's Welsh early evening news programme .
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Original:  Current S4C chair John Walter Jones said, “He managed to establish a Welsh language television service that was admired throughout the world.  
Revised:  Current S4C chair John Walter Jones said, “He managed to establish a Welsh language television service that was admired throughout the world. ” 
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Original: Owen Edwards, the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C, has died at the age of 76, it was announced on Tuesday.
Revised: Owen Edwards, the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C, has died at the age of 76.
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Original:   Environment Permanent Secretary Ronald Thompson said that while the ministry has yet to draft the necessary safety protocols, government will frame its future policies around existing ones from other countrie 
Revised:  Environment Permanent Secretary Ronald Thompson said that while the ministry has yet to draft the necessary safety protocols, government will frame its future policies around existing ones from other countries. 
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Original:  We enjoy a good relationship with Bahamian authorities and are confident that this situation will be resolved quickly  
Revised:  We enjoy a good relationship with Bahamian authorities and are confident that this situation will be resolved quickly ." 
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Original: The Bahamas has stop all new applications for oil exploration off their shores The government of The Bahamas have announced that they have stopped accepting any new applications for oil exploration off their shores.
Revised: The Bahamas has stopped all new applications for oil exploration off their shores The government of The Bahamas have announced that they have stopped accepting any new applications for oil exploration off their shores.
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Original:   The Russian foriegn office released a statment on the event saying "We view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations  
Revised:  The Russian foriegn office released a statment on the event saying "We view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations ." 
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