wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  By restricting the user's breathing, these novel devices can improve cardiorespiratory fitness, leading to better sport performance.
Revised:  By restricting the user's breathing, these novel devices can improve cardiorespiratory fitness, which leads to better sport performance.
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Original:   During a 6-week high-intensity training program, moderately trained subjects using training masks, improved endurance capacity (VO2 max) and power output significantly.
Revised:  The benefits of using a training mask are not reserved for the athletic elite, however. During a 6-week high-intensity training program, moderately trained subjects using training masks, improved endurance capacity (VO2 max) and power output significantly.
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Original:   During a 6-week high-intensity training program, moderately trained subjects using training masks, improved endurance capacity (VO2 max) and power output significantly.
Revised:  During a 6-week high intensity training program, moderately trained subjects using training masks, improved endurance capacity (VO2 max) and power output significantly.
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Original: Training Mask Training Masks  allow users to actively work on their respiratory muscle fitness.
Revised: Training masks are facial masks worn to limit the intake of air during breathing. Their ostensible purpose is to strengthen the respiratory musculature by making it work harder. There is some evidence that they may improve endurance capacity (VO2 max) and power output, but research into their benefits has so far generally proven inconclusive. allow users to actively work on their respiratory muscle fitness.
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Original: Training Mask Training Masks  allow users to actively work on their respiratory muscle fitness.
Revised: Training Mask Training Masks Training masks Training masks allow users to actively work on their respiratory muscle fitness.
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Original:  While they do not alter oxygen concentration, they  add resistance to the respiratory muscles by limiting air supply and thus trigger an adaptive physiological response.
Revised:  While they do not alter the oxygen concentration of the air taken in. add resistance to the respiratory muscles by limiting air supply and thus trigger an adaptive physiological response.
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Original:  While they do not alter oxygen concentration, they  add resistance to the respiratory muscles by limiting air supply and thus trigger an adaptive physiological response.
Revised:  While they do not alter oxygen concentration, they However, they appear to add resistance to the respiratory muscles by limiting air supply and thus trigger an adaptive physiological response.
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Original:  While they do not alter oxygen concentration, they  add resistance to the respiratory muscles by limiting air supply and thus trigger an adaptive physiological response.
Revised:  While they do not alter oxygen concentration, they add resistance to the respiratory muscles by limiting air supply , thus triggering an adaptive physiological response.
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Original:  The muscles of respiration, from the diaphragm , the intercostals , to the assisting musculature, need to be trained like any other muscle to increase resistance to fatigue and maximize performance.
Revised:  The muscles of respiration, from the diaphragm and the intercostals to the assisting musculature, need to be trained like any other muscle to increase resistance to fatigue and maximize performance.
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Original:  The muscles of respiration, from the diaphragm , the intercostals , to the assisting musculature, need to be trained like any other muscle to increase resistance to fatigue and maximize performance.
Revised:  The muscles of respiration, from the diaphragm , the intercostals , to the assisting musculature, need to be trained like any other muscles to increase resistance to fatigue and maximize performance.
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Original:  Respiratory Muscle Training (RMT) is a specialized training method developed to condition the muscles of respiration specifically.
Revised:  Respiratory Muscle Training (RMT) is a training method developed to condition the muscles of respiration specifically.
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Original:  By restricting the user's breathing, these novel devices can improve cardiorespiratory fitness, which leads to better sport performance.
Revised:  By restricting the user's breathing, the devices may improve cardiorespiratory fitness, which leads to better sport performance.
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Original:  During a 6-week high intensity training program, moderately trained subjects using training masks , improved endurance capacity (VO2 max) and power output significantly.
Revised:  During a 6-week high-intensity training program, moderately trained subjects using training masks , improved endurance capacity (VO2 max) and power output significantly.
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Original:  During a 6-week high intensity training program, moderately trained subjects using training masks , improved endurance capacity (VO2 max) and power output significantly.
Revised:  During a 6-week high intensity training program, moderately trained subjects using training masks were found to have improved their endurance capacity (VO2 max) and power output significantly.
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Original:  In addition to the findings that respiratory muscle loading improved performance across multiple metrics, the researchers speculated that the performance increases may have been attributed to the re-breathing of expired air .
Revised:  While observing that the respiratory muscle loading improved performance across multiple metrics, the researchers speculated that the performance increases may have been attributed to the re-breathing of expired air .
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Original:  In addition to the findings that respiratory muscle loading improved performance across multiple metrics, the researchers speculated that the performance increases may have been attributed to the re-breathing of expired air .
Revised:  In addition to the findings that respiratory muscle loading improved performance across multiple metrics, the researchers speculated that the performance increases may also have been attributable to the re-breathing of expired air .
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Original:  This in-turn may have further augmented positive results due to improved Co2 Tolerance .
Revised:  This in-turn may have further augmented positive results due to improved CO2 tolerance .
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Original:  15(2): 379-86 There is conflicting research on the performance benefits seen with respiratory muscle training, challenging the assumption that an increase in inspiratory muscle fitness translates to better work capacity and athletic performance.
Revised:  15(2): 379-86 There is conflicting research on the performance benefits of RMT, some challenging the assumption that an increase in inspiratory muscle fitness translates to better work capacity and athletic performance.
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Original:  15(2): 379-86
Revised:  15(2): 379–86
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Original:  Shaun Montes a young Texan native invented these masks trading for soccer as a young junior national standout.
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Original: category:Nigerian people Category:Igbo people category:1990 births Ezinne Akudo Anyaoha (born 17 May 1990) is a Nigerian lawyer and beauty queen.
Revised:  Ezinne Akudo Anyaoha (born 17 May 1990) is a Nigerian lawyer and beauty queen.
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Original:  She has also been active in campaigning against sexual violence. 
Revised:  She has also been active in campaigning against sexual violence. *
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Original:  She graduated from Federal Government Girls' College, Owerri Imo State . and earned a law degree at Abia State University  .
Revised:  She graduated from Federal Government Girls' College, Owerri Imo State , and earned a law degree at Abia State University .
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Original:  She graduated from Federal Government Girls' College, Owerri Imo State, and earned a law degree at Abia State University . Completed the mandatory National Youth Service Corp in Ogun State.
Revised:  She graduated from Federal Government Girls' College, Owerri Imo State, and earned a law degree at Abia State University , subsequently completing the mandatory National Youth Service Corp in Ogun State.
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Original: Progressive Counting (PC) is a psychotherapy technique developed by Ricky Greenwald designed for trauma resolution based on the counting method.
Revised: Progressive counting (PC) is a psychotherapy technique developed by Ricky Greenwald designed for trauma resolution based on the counting method.
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Original: Progressive counting (PC) is a psychotherapy technique developed by  Ricky Greenwald designed for trauma resolution based on the counting method.
Revised: Progressive counting (PC) is a psychotherapy technique developed by Dr. Ricky Greenwald designed for trauma resolution based on the counting method.
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Original: Progressive counting (PC) is a psychotherapy technique developed by Dr. Ricky Greenwald designed for trauma resolution based on the counting method.
Revised: Progressive counting (PC) is a psychotherapy technique developed by Ricky Greenwald designed for trauma resolution based on the counting method.
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Original:  The therapist then asks the client to rate their level of distress on a scale of 0-10 (according to the Subjective units of distress scale or SUDS).
Revised:  The therapist then asks the client to rate their level of distress on a scale of 0-10 (according to the subjective units of distress scale or SUDS).
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Original:  <ref name=TandyJWarnow-FamilyHistoryPage>
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Original: Early life Warnow-Blewett was born to parents David Nelson and Edith Nelson (née Sjolander ).
Revised: Early life Warnow-Blewett was born to parents David Nelson and Edith Nelson (née Sjölander ).
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Original: Tokheho H Sema is a seasoned Indian Politician, a Nagaland State founding Member, a very Eminent Social Worker, Prolific Speaker Statesman who could look beyond barriers and a Public Servant from the state of Nagaland.
Revised: Tokheho Statesman who could look beyond barriers and a Public Servant from the state of Nagaland.
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Original: Tokheho H Sema is a seasoned Indian Politician, a Nagaland State founding Member, a very Eminent Social Worker, Prolific Speaker Statesman who could look beyond barriers and a Public Servant from the state of Nagaland.
Revised: Tokheho H Sema is a seasoned Indian Politician, a Nagaland State founding Member, a very Eminent Social Worker, Prolific Speaker Sema is an Indian politician and public servant from the state of Nagaland.
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Original:  This was noticed by the "Sema or Sumi" tribe and was finally elected to represent "Naga People's Convention" (NPC) in 1959 on behalf of the Sema tribe and became the youngest member of the Interim Body (Nagaland Assembly), which was formed after signing the 16-Point Agreement in 1961 and eventually oversaw the formation of the Nagaland state in 1963.
Revised:  This was noticed by the "Sema or Sumi" tribe and was finally elected to represent "Naga People's Convention" (NPC) in 1959 on behalf of the Sema tribe and became the youngest member of the Nagaland Interim Body which oversaw the formation of the Nagaland state in 1963.
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Original:  This was noticed by the "Sema or Sumi" tribe and was finally elected to represent "Naga People's Convention" (NPC) in 1959 on behalf of the Sema tribe and became the youngest member of the Interim Body (Nagaland Assembly), which was formed after signing the 16-Point Agreement in 1961 and eventually oversaw the formation of the Nagaland state in 1963.
Revised:  This was noticed by the "Sema or Sumi" tribe and was finally elected to represent "Naga People's Convention" (NPC) in 1959 on behalf of the Sema tribe and became the youngest member of the Interim Body (Nagaland Assembly), which was formed after signing the 16-Point Agreement in 1961 and eventually oversaw the formation of the state in 1963.
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Original:  At that time he was only 28 years old.
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Original:  While he was serving in the State Ministry, there were instances where he was named as " LION "%DIFDELCMD < & %%% " Saitan " by the Chief Minister's since it wasn't as easy as a cup of tea to convince him to compensate on certain matters instead of development.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% " Saitan " by the Chief Minister's since it wasn't as easy as a cup of tea to convince him to compensate on certain matters instead of development.
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Original:  Tokheho Sema was an active social worker who has been associated with many organizations in various capacities such as Founder of Zunheboto Arts College in 1975, Executive Member of Sema Baptist Churches Association (1984 - 1986), Founder%DIFDELCMD < & %%% President of the 1st Sumi GB's Association (1984 - 1997), Secretary of Naga GB's Federation (1995 - 1997) and President Naga GB Federation (1997 - 1999).
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% President of the 1st Sumi GB's Association (1984 - 1997), Secretary of Naga GB's Federation (1995 - 1997) and President Naga GB Federation (1997 - 1999).
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Original:  He  also served as a Senior Cabinet Minister with various portfolios and contested the State Assembly elections as an Indian National Congress candidate .
Revised:  He has also served as a Senior Cabinet Minister with various portfolios and contested the State Assembly elections as an Indian National Congress candidate .
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Original:  He was a former Leader of the Congress Legislature Party in the assembly.
Revised:  He was a former Leader of the Congress legislature party in the assembly.
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Original:  The Government of India awarded him the Prestigious Fourth Highest Civilian Honour of the Padma Shri, in 2016, for his contributions to Public affairs.
Revised:  The Government of India awarded him the fourth highest civilian honour of the Padma Shri, in 2016, for his contributions to Public affairs.
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Original:  He is the only person among the politician from the State to receive this Prestigious Parma Shri Award conferred by the Government of India.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% al External links Category:Recipients of the Padma Shri in public affairs Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Naga people Category:  Indian National Congress politicians from Nagaland Category:Members of the Nagaland Legislative Assemb
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Category:Recipients of the Padma Shri in public affairs Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Naga people Category: Indian National Congress politicians from Nagaland Category:Members of the Nagaland Legislative Assemb
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% al External links Category:Recipients of the Padma Shri in public affairs Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Naga people Category:  Indian National Congress politicians from Nagaland Category:Members of the Nagaland Legislative Assemb
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% al External links Category:Recipients of the Padma Shri in public affairs Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Naga people Category: Nagaland politicians Category: Indian National Congress politicians from Nagaland Category:Members of the Nagaland Legislative Assemb
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% al External links Category:Recipients of the Padma Shri in public affairs Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Naga people Category:  Indian National Congress politicians from Nagaland Category:Members of the Nagaland Legislative Assemb
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% al External links Category:Recipients of the Padma Shri in public affairs Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Naga people Category: Indian National Congress politicians Category:Members of the Nagaland Legislative Assemb
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Original: Tokheho Sema is an Indian politician and public servant from the state of Nagaland.
Revised: Tokheho Sema was an Indian politician and public servant from the state of Nagaland.
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Original:  However, shortly after, following the outbreak of  plague, he moved towards the western part of Azerbaijan with the rest of his tribe.
Revised:  However, shortly after, following the outbreak of the plague, he moved towards the western part of Azerbaijan with the rest of his tribe.
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Original:  However, shortly after, following the outbreak of the plague, he moved towards the western part of Azerbaijan with the rest of his tribe.
Revised:  However, shortly after, following the outbreak of a plague, he moved towards the western part of Azerbaijan with the rest of his tribe.
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Original: Qāsem Sultan Afshar or Qāsem Sultan Imānlū Afshar, was a Safavid military leader and official during the reign of king Abbas I ( r. 1588–1629).
Revised: Qāsem Sultan Afshar or Qāsem Sultan Imānlū Afshar, was a Safavid military leader and official during the reign of King (Shah) Abbas I ( r. 1588–1629).
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Original: Qāsem Sultan Afshar or Qāsem Sultan Imānlū Afshar, was a Safavid military leader and official during the reign of king Abbas I ( r. 1588–1629).
Revised: Qāsem Sultan Afshar or Qāsem Sultan Imānlū Afshar, was a Safavid military leader and official during the reign of king Abbas I ( 1588–1629).
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Original:  With the advent of king Abbas I 's rule , Qāsem Sultan became the head of a group of Afshars whose duty it was to protect the marshes surrounding the city of Kermanshah.
Revised:  When King Abbas I ascended the throne , Qāsem Sultan became the head of a group of Afshars whose duty it was to protect the marshes surrounding the city of Kermanshah.
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Original:  During the early years of the 17th century, which were marked by wars against the archrival of the Safavids — the Ottomans — Qāsem Sultan fought with great distinction, which earned him the governorshop of Mosul in 1622.
Revised:  In the early 17th century, which were marked by wars against the archrival of the Safavids — the Ottomans — Qāsem Sultan fought with great distinction, which earned him the governorshop of Mosul in 1622.
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Original:  During the early years of the 17th century, which were marked by wars against the archrival of the Safavids — the Ottomans — Qāsem Sultan fought with great distinction, which earned him the governorshop of Mosul in 1622.
Revised:  During the early years of the 17th century, marked by wars against the archrival of the Safavids — the Ottomans — Qāsem Sultan fought with great distinction, which earned him the governorshop of Mosul in 1622.
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Original:  During the early years of the 17th century, which were marked by wars against the archrival of the Safavids — the Ottomans — Qāsem Sultan fought with great distinction, which earned him the governorshop of Mosul in 1622.
Revised:  During the early years of the 17th century, which were marked by wars against the archrivals of the Safavids — the Ottomans — Qāsem Sultan fought with great distinction, which earned him the governorshop of Mosul in 1622.
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Original:  His son Kalb-e ʿAlī Beg (or Kalb' Ali Sultan Afshar) was appointed governor of Urmia in 1627-28, or 1630, which he remained up to 1648.
Revised:  His son Kalb-e ʿAlī Beg (or Kalb' Ali Sultan Afshar) was appointed governor of Urmia in 1627-28, or 1630, until 1648.
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Original:  When King Abbas I ascended the throne , Qāsem Sultan became the head of a group of Afshars whose duty it was to protect the marshes surrounding the city of Kermanshah.
Revised:  During King Abbas I ascended the throne , Qāsem Sultan became the head of a group of Afshars whose duty it was to protect the marshes surrounding the city of Kermanshah.
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Original:  When King Abbas I ascended the throne , Qāsem Sultan became the head of a group of Afshars whose duty it was to protect the marshes surrounding the city of Kermanshah.
Revised:  When King Abbas I 's early reign , Qāsem Sultan became the head of a group of Afshars whose duty it was to protect the marshes surrounding the city of Kermanshah.
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Original:  She had modeled in several different countries such as Jamaica, Brazil, Canada and Haiti.
Revised:  She had modeled in countries such as Jamaica, Brazil, Canada and Haiti.
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Original:  First working at Legal Aid Manitoba, practicing criminal and family law, Meadmore soon opened Winnipeg's first all-female law URL Meadmore fonds (umlarchives.lib.umanitoba.ca/marion-meadmore-fonds) which focused on corporate law.
Revised:  First working at Legal Aid Manitoba, practicing criminal and family law, Meadmore soon opened Winnipeg's first all-female law firm,Marion Meadmore fonds (umlarchives.lib.umanitoba.ca/marion-meadmore-fonds) which focused on corporate law.
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Original:  First working at Legal Aid Manitoba, practicing criminal and family law, Meadmore soon opened Winnipeg's first all-female law firm,Marion Meadmore fonds (umlarchives.lib.umanitoba.ca/marion-meadmore-fonds) which focused on corporate law.
Revised:  First working at Legal Aid Manitoba, practicing criminal and family law, Meadmore soon opened Winnipeg's first all-female law URL which focused on corporate law.
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Original:  First working at Legal Aid Manitoba, practicing criminal and family law, Meadmore soon opened Winnipeg's first all-female law URL which focused on corporate law.
Revised:  First working at Legal Aid Manitoba, practicing criminal and family law, Meadmore soon opened Winnipeg's first all-female law firm, which focused on corporate law.
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Original: The Sangtam is a Naga tribe living in the Tuensang district of Nagaland.
Revised: The Sangtams are a Naga tribe living in the Tuensang district of Nagaland.
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Original:  Blood viscosity also increases with increases in red cell aggregability (see below) .
Revised:  Blood viscosity also increases with increases in red cell aggregability .
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Original:  Red blood cell deformation and aggregation is also coupled with flow induced changes in the arrangement and orientation as a third major factor in its viscoelastic behavior.
Revised:  Red blood cell deformation and aggregation is also coupled with flow-induced changes in the arrangement and orientation as a third major factor in its viscoelastic behavior.
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Original:  After four years, he was replaced by missionary descendant Luther Halsey Gulick, Sr. in 1865.
Revised:  After four years, he was replaced by missionary Luther Halsey Gulick, Sr. in 1865.
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Original:  American writer Mark Twain visited the island kingdom at the time and described the legislative session and Ragsdale: His friend Mark Twain later returned to writing a fictional story based on Ragsdale's life which was never finished, although elements of the story were incorporated into Twain's A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court''.
Revised:  American writer Mark Twain visited the island kingdom at the time and described the legislative session and Ragsdale: His friend Mark Twain later wrote a draft to fictional story based on Ragsdale's life which was never finished, although elements of the story were incorporated into Twain's A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court''.
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Original: Early life and career Ragsdale was born in 1837 , a hapa-haole or half-Hawaiian, half-Caucasian.
Revised: Early life and career Ragsdale was born in , a hapa-haole or half-Hawaiian, half-Caucasian.
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