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Original: Mr English said that he  and Mr Key will be the leaders for several elections.
Revised: Mr English said that he believes that he and Mr Key will be the leaders for several elections.
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Original:  "Can I tell you I think we will make a formidable team  . Key said the public placed a high value on unity.
Revised:  "Can I tell you I think we will make a formidable team ," he said . Key said the public placed a high value on unity.
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Original:  If National could demonstrate it could manage itself, then it could start to manage the country."
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Original:  He is at number 3 on the list of National MP , behind Key and English.
Revised:  He is at number 3 on the list of National MPs , behind Key and English.
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Original:  His new caucus responsibilities will be : Spokesman for the Security and Intelligence Service and Spokesman for Relationships with Non-Government Parties.
Revised:  His new caucus responsibilities will be Spokesman for the Security and Intelligence Service and Spokesman for Relationships with Non-Government Parties.
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Original: The decision is as long as Eden Park follows does a "...redevelopment design, and on governance and funding issues going forward, with a report back to Cabinet by December 13.
Revised: The decision is only if Eden Park can do a "...redevelopment design, and on governance and funding issues going forward, with a report back to Cabinet by December 13.
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Original:  Kohli recieved other 15 nominations to support Rajnath as party chief.
Revised:  Kohli received other 15 nominations to support Rajnath as party chief.
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Original: Members of Parliament of India has attacked Indian cricket team coach Greg Chappell over his comments over MPs criticism on the cricket team .
Revised: Members of Indian Parliament have attacked cricket coach Greg Chappell over his comments over MPs criticism on the cricket team .
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Original: Members of Parliament of India has attacked Indian cricket team coach Greg Chappell over his comments over MPs criticism on the cricket team .
Revised: Members of Parliament of India has attacked Indian cricket team coach Greg Chappell over his comments about the criticism levelled against him by certain politicians .
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Original:  Chappell fuelled the further controversy by making controversial statements and said that he was not surprised by the sharp criticism from the MPs over poor performance of the cricket team in one-day international matches.
Revised:  Chappell fuelled the controversy by making controversial statements and said that he was not surprised by the sharp criticism from the MPs over poor performance of the cricket team in one-day international matches.
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Original:  Chappell fuelled the further controversy by making controversial statements and said that he was not surprised by the sharp criticism from the MPs over poor performance of the cricket team in one-day international matches.
Revised:  Chappell fuelled the further controversy by making controversial statements and said that he was not surprised by the sharp criticism from the MPs over the team's poor performance in one-day international matches.
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Original:  He added that they were doing their job and paid to do so in parliament .
Revised:  He added that they were doing the "job they were paid for" .
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Original:  Seven members of parliament attacked him for his controversial statements.
Revised:  Seven Members of Parliament attacked him for his controversial statements.
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Original:  On Sunday, after 106-run defeat in Capetown, Chappell said that the key players are not playing well enough and there are many players out of the formin the team
Revised:  On Sunday, after 106-run defeat in Capetown, Chappell said that the key players are not playing well enough and that many players are out of form
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Original:  Votes are still to be fully counted but the National Party have achieved eight Lower House seats, while the Greens and Labor are still battling to see which party will win the seat of Melbourne
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Original:  He collided with Belgian Dimitri DeFauw during the second Madison of the evening and hit a metal barrier.
Revised:  He collided with Belgium's Dimitri DeFauw during the second Madison of the evening and hit a metal barrier.
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Original: Isaac Gálvez World Madison champion Isaac Gálvez Lopez died in the early hours of Sunday morning after crashing on the fifth day of the Six Days of Ghent track cycling race.
Revised:  World Madison champion Isaac Gálvez Lopez died in the early hours of Sunday morning after crashing on the fifth day of the Six Days of Ghent track cycling race.
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Original: Isaac Gálvez World Madison champion Isaac Gálvez Lopez died in the early hours of Sunday morning after crashing on the fifth day of the Six Days of Ghent track cycling race.
Revised: Isaac Gálvez World Madison champion died in the early hours of Sunday morning after crashing on the fifth day of the Six Days of Ghent track cycling race.
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Original: Isaac Gálvez World Madison champion Isaac Gálvez Lopez died in the early hours of Sunday morning after crashing on the fifth day of the Six Days of Ghent track cycling race.
Revised: Isaac Gálvez World Madison champion Isaac Gálvez Lopez died in the early hours of Sunday morning after crashing on the fifth day of the track cycling race.
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Original:  At the time of the accident, Gálvez and team-mate Juan Llaneras were lying second in the overall standings, one lap behind the Belgium/ German pair Iljo Keisse andRobert Bartko
Revised:  At the time of the accident, Gálvez and team-mate were lying second in the overall standings, one lap behind the Belgium/ German pair Iljo Keisse andRobert Bartko
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Original:  At the time of the accident, Gálvez and team-mate Juan Llaneras were lying second in the overall standings, one lap behind the Belgium/ German pair Iljo Keisse andRobert Bartko
Revised:  At the time of the accident, Gálvez and team-mate Juan Llaneras were lying second in the overall standings, one lap behind the Belgium/ pair and
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Original:  It is uncertain what factors contribute to the spread of Avian Flu that first surfaced in Asia in 2003.
Revised: Avian Flu first surfaced in Asia in 2003. It is uncertain what factors contribute to the spread of Avian Flu that first surfaced in Asia in 2003.
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Original:  "Although the spread of H5N1 in Asia has been primarily due to movement of domestic birds, the movement of this virus into wild birds raised the possibility that these species may also spread the virus," according to the March 2006 interagency strategic plan issued by the U.S.Department of the Interior  .
Revised:  "Although the spread of H5N1 in Asia has been primarily due to movement of domestic birds, the movement of this virus into wild birds raised the possibility that these species may also spread the virus," the U.S.Department of the Interior .
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Original: The Virginia Department of Game and Inland Fisheries (VDGIF) announced last week, at the start of the waterfowl hunting season, that it is working cooperatively with the U.S. Department of Agriculture and Interior with its national strategy to monitor the spread of the pathogenic strain of Asian H5N1 among migratory birds.
Revised: The Virginia Department of Game and Inland Fisheries (VDGIF) announced last week, at the start of the waterfowl hunting season, that it is working cooperatively with the U.S. Department of Agriculture and Interior in its national strategy to monitor the spread of the pathogenic strain of Asian H5N1 among migratory birds.
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Original:  It was found that Avian flu moved into wild birds and caused mortality among species of barheaded geese, brown-headed gulls, black-headed gulls, ruddy shelducks, and great cormorants in China in 2005  
Revised:  It was found that Avian flu moved into wild birds and caused mortality among species of barheaded geese, brown-headed gulls, black-headed gulls, ruddy shelducks, and great cormorants in China in 2005. 
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Original: VDGIF staff are are in the field checking popular hunting spots, waterway boat ramps, and wildlife management areas where returning hunters may be asked to allow them to perform a swab test on bagged birds.
Revised: VDGIF staff are in the field checking popular hunting spots, waterway boat ramps, and wildlife management areas where returning hunters may be asked to allow them to perform a swab test on bagged birds.
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Original:  The VDGIF press release says the procedure only takes seconds to perform, and those who bagged 3 birds of the targetted species can call the department to have someone come check the birds.
Revised:  The VDGIF press release says the procedure only takes seconds to perform, and those who bagged 3 birds of the targeted species can call the department to have someone come check the birds.
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Original: The Canadian House of Commons approved a motion reconginzing the Québécois [the people of Quebec] as a nation within Canada, Monday night, by a margin of 266 to 16.
Revised: The Canadian House of Commons approved a motion recognizing the Québécois [the people of Quebec] as a nation within Canada, Monday night, by a margin of 266 to 16.
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Original:  While the dissenting Liberal MPs do not face censure by their party  Conservative backbenchers who opposed the resolution could only go as far as abstaining if they wished to remain in the Tory caucus, according to Mr. Chong.
Revised:  While the dissenting Liberal MPs do not face censure by their party , Conservative backbenchers who opposed the resolution could only go as far as abstaining if they wished to remain in the Tory caucus, according to Mr. Chong.
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Original:  The government resolution substituted the word Québécois for Quebec and added the words "within a united Canada".
Revised:  The government resolution substituted the word Québécois for Quebeckers and added the words "within a united Canada".
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Original:  The Intelligence agent, Nicola Calipari, was escorting freed hostage, Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena, when thier car came under fire by US troops on the journey to Baghdad airport last week, leaving Nicola Calipari dead, and Giuliana Sgrena, and another Intelligence agent wounded.
Revised:  The Intelligence agent, Nicola Calipari, was escorting freed hostage, Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena, when their car came under fire by US troops on the journey to Baghdad airport last week, leaving Nicola Calipari dead, and Giuliana Sgrena, and another Intelligence agent wounded.
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Original:  Berlusconi's speech to parliment comes a day after his Foreign Minister, Gianfranco Fini made a similar speech to lawmakers, where he refuted Ms Sgrena's claims that the shooting was the result of an ambush.
Revised:  Berlusconi's speech to parliament comes a day after his Foreign Minister, Gianfranco Fini made a similar speech to lawmakers, where he refuted Ms Sgrena's claims that the shooting was the result of an ambush.
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Original:  However in a statement given immediatly after the attack by the the US Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who control Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the US Army of thier journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
Revised:  However in a statement given immediately after the attack by the the US Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who control Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the US Army of thier journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
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Original:  However in a statement given immediatly after the attack by the the US Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who control Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the US Army of thier journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
Revised:  However in a statement given immediatly after the attack by the the US Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who control Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the US Army of their journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
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Original:  Mr Berlusconi said, discribing the shooting as an "accident".
Revised:  Mr Berlusconi said, describing the shooting as an "accident".
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Original:  Meanwhile the office of Italian President Carlo Azeglio Ciampi said that it had recieved a letter from the US President George Bush saying that the shooting was a "terrible tragedy" and that "President Bush assures President Ciampi that the United States will move toward a swift and exhaustive joint investigation"
Revised:  Meanwhile the office of Italian President Carlo Azeglio Ciampi said that it had received a letter from the US President George Bush saying that the shooting was a "terrible tragedy" and that "President Bush assures President Ciampi that the United States will move toward a swift and exhaustive joint investigation"
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Original: In his first public speech since the fatal shooting that killed an Italian Intelligence agent in Iraq, Italian Prime minister Silvio Berlusconi has rejected the version of events presented by the US administration.
Revised: In his first public speech since the fatal shooting that killed an Italian Intelligence agent in Iraq, Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi has rejected the version of events presented by the US administration.
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Original:  The Intelligence agent, Nicola Calipari, was escorting freed hostage, Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena, when their car came under fire by US troops on the journey to Baghdad airport last week, leaving Nicola Calipari dead, and Giuliana Sgrena , and another Intelligence agent wounded.
Revised:  The Intelligence agent, Nicola Calipari, was escorting freed hostage, Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena, when their car came under fire by US troops on the journey to Baghdad airport last week, leaving Nicola Calipari dead, Giuliana Sgrena and another intelligence agent wounded.
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Original:  Mr  Berlusconi has disputed US claims that the car was speeding and also said that the US military had known of and authorised the car's journey.
Revised:  Mr . Berlusconi has disputed US claims that the car was speeding and also said that the US military had known of and authorised the car's journey.
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Original:  Mr  Berlusconi has disputed US claims that the car was speeding and also said that the US military had known of and authorised the car's journey.
Revised:  Mr Berlusconi has disputed U.S. claims that the car was speeding and also said that the US military had known of and authorised the car's journey.
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Original:  Mr  Berlusconi has disputed US claims that the car was speeding and also said that the US military had known of and authorised the car's journey.
Revised:  Mr Berlusconi has disputed US claims that the car was speeding and also said that the U.S. military had known of and authorised the car's journey.
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Original:  Berlusconi's speech to parliament comes a day after his Foreign Minister, Gianfranco Fini made a similar speech to lawmakers, where he refuted Ms  Sgrena's claims that the shooting was the result of an ambush.
Revised:  Berlusconi's speech to parliament comes a day after his Foreign Minister, Gianfranco Fini made a similar speech to lawmakers, where he refuted Ms . Sgrena's claims that the shooting was the result of an ambush.
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Original:  However in a statement given immediately after the attack by the the US Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who control Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the US Army of their journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
Revised:  However in a statement given immediately after the attack by the the U.S. Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who control Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the US Army of their journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
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Original:  However in a statement given immediately after the attack by the the US Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who control Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the US Army of their journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
Revised:  However in a statement given immediately after the attack by the the US Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who controls Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the US Army of their journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
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Original:  However in a statement given immediately after the attack by the the US Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who control Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the US Army of their journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
Revised:  However in a statement given immediately after the attack by the the US Army's 3rd Infantry Division, who control Baghdad, said that Italian officials had given no advance warning to the U.S. Army of their journey, and that the car was speeding and refused to stop.
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Original:  Mr Berlusconi said, describing the shooting as an "accident ".
Revised:  Mr Berlusconi said, describing the shooting as an "accident ."
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Original:  Meanwhile the office of Italian President Carlo Azeglio Ciampi said that it had received a letter from the US President George Bush saying that the shooting was a "terrible tragedy" and that "President Bush assures President Ciampi that the United States will move toward a swift and exhaustive joint investigation ".
Revised:  Meanwhile the office of Italian President Carlo Azeglio Ciampi said that it had received a letter from U.S. President George Bush saying that the shooting was a "terrible tragedy" and that "President Bush assures President Ciampi that the United States will move toward a swift and exhaustive joint investigation ".
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Original:  Meanwhile the office of Italian President Carlo Azeglio Ciampi said that it had received a letter from the US President George Bush saying that the shooting was a "terrible tragedy" and that "President Bush assures President Ciampi that the United States will move toward a swift and exhaustive joint investigation ".
Revised:  Meanwhile the office of Italian President Carlo Azeglio Ciampi said that it had received a letter from the US President George Bush saying that the shooting was a "terrible tragedy" and that "President Bush assures President Ciampi that the United States will move toward a swift and exhaustive joint investigation ."
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Original:  Recently, the Associated Press and the Italian RAI TGI television released photos of the car after the alleged attack by the American soldiers:, . The pictures show almost no damages in the vehicle.
Revised:  Recently, the Associated Press and the Italian RAI TGI television released photos of the car after the attack by American soldiers., The pictures show almost no damages in the vehicle.
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Original:  Recently, the Associated Press and the Italian RAI TGI television released photos of the car after the alleged attack by the American soldiers:, . The pictures show almost no damages in the vehicle.
Revised:  Recently, the Associated Press and the Italian RAI TGI television released photos of the car after the alleged attack by the American soldiers:, . The pictures show little visible damage to the vehicle.
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Original:  Also Sgrena neihter somebody else explained how could just Calipari have died and she (the alleged target) and others passagers survive since, as reported by the London Observer, Sgrena told the American soldiers fired between 300 and 400 bullets from an armoured vehicle 
Revised:  Sgrena claims that the American soldiers fired between 300 and 400 bullets from an armoured vehicle 
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Original:  Also Sgrena neihter somebody else explained how could just Calipari have died and she (the alleged target) and others passagers survive since, as reported by the London Observer, Sgrena told the American soldiers fired between 300 and 400 bullets from an armoured vehicle 
Revised:  Also Sgrena neihter somebody else explained how could just Calipari have died and she (the alleged target) and others passagers survive since, as reported by the London Observer, Sgrena told the American soldiers fired between 300 and 400 rounds at the car from an armoured vehicle 
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Original:  The Intelligence agent, Nicola Calipari, was escorting freed hostage, Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena, when their car came under fire by US troops on the journey to Baghdad airport last week, leaving Nicola Calipari dead , Giuliana Sgrena and another intelligence agent wounded.
Revised:  The intelligence agent, Nicola Calipari, was escorting freed hostage, Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena, when their car came under fire by US troops on the journey to Baghdad airport last week, leaving Nicola Calipari dead , Giuliana Sgrena and another intelligence agent wounded.
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Original:  The Intelligence agent, Nicola Calipari, was escorting freed hostage, Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena, when their car came under fire by US troops on the journey to Baghdad airport last week, leaving Nicola Calipari dead , Giuliana Sgrena and another intelligence agent wounded.
Revised:  The Intelligence agent, Nicola Calipari, was escorting freed hostage, Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena, when their car came under fire by US troops on the journey to Baghdad airport last week, leaving Nicola Calipari dead and Giuliana Sgrena and another intelligence agent wounded.
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Original:  Berlusconi's speech to parliament comes a day after his Foreign Minister, Gianfranco Fini made a similar speech to lawmakers, where he refuted Ms. Sgrena's claims that the shooting was the result of an ambush   .
Revised:  Berlusconi's speech to parliament comes a day after his Foreign Minister, Gianfranco Fini made a similar speech to lawmakers, where he refuted Ms. Sgrena's claims that the shooting was the result of an ambush . .
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Original: Gary Johnson speaks to Wikinews on Syria and foreign intervention upGary Johnson. ) Though the fallout from the break-in at Benghazi was the main foreign policy focus in October, there was also some discussion, especially during the final debate, about the unrest in Syria and actions of the government, which have led to the killings of roughly 30,000 people and displacement of 300,000.
Revised: Gary Johnson speaks to Wikinews on Syria and foreign intervention upGary Johnson. Though the fallout from the break-in at Benghazi was the main foreign policy focus in October, there was also some discussion, especially during the final debate, about the unrest in Syria and actions of the government, which have led to the killings of roughly 30,000 people and displacement of 300,000.
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Original:  Goode answers questions after the first Free and Equal debate.
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Original:  I will promote long-term U.S. security and build better relationships with other nations by ending the immoral drone killings that have already killed hundreds of innocent civilians and created more hatred and hostility toward the U.S . Anderson poses with a supporter after the first Free and Equal debate .
Revised:  I will promote long-term U.S. security and build better relationships with other nations by ending the immoral drone killings that have already killed hundreds of innocent civilians and created more hatred and hostility toward the U.S Anderson poses with a supporter after the first Free and Equal debate .
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