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Original:  During the Great Depression Steinhauer would supplement his farming work with other labour such as logging and cutting fence posts.
Revised:  During the Great Depression Steinhauer supplemented his farming work with other labour such as logging and cutting fence posts.
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Original:  When Prime Minister Pierre Trudeau asked him to be the lieutenant-governor of Alberta, he responded, "I'm not schooled for a thing like this...
Revised:  When Prime Minister Pierre Trudeau asked him to be the lieutenant governor of Alberta, he responded, "I'm not schooled for a thing like this...
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Original:  Steinhauer would be the second Treaty Indian to run as a candidate in a federal election.
Revised:  Steinhauer was the second treaty Indian to run as a candidate in a federal election.
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Original:  He would establish the Saddle Lake Centennial Development Association  which became a successful farming venture for the First Nation.
Revised:  He established the Saddle Lake Centennial Development Association which became a successful farming venture for the First Nation.
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Original:  He would establish the Saddle Lake Centennial Development Association  which became a successful farming venture for the First Nation.
Revised:  He would establish the Saddle Lake Centennial Development Association , which became a successful farming venture for the First Nation.
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Original:  10th Lieutenant Governor of Alberta On the advice of Prime Minister Pierre Elliott Trudeau, Ralph G. Steinhauer was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Alberta effective July 2, 1974.
Revised:  10th lieutenant governor of Alberta On the advice of Prime Minister Pierre Elliott Trudeau, Ralph G. Steinhauer was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Alberta effective July 2, 1974.
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Original:  10th Lieutenant Governor of Alberta On the advice of Prime Minister Pierre Elliott Trudeau, Ralph G. Steinhauer was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Alberta effective July 2, 1974.
Revised:  10th Lieutenant Governor of Alberta On the advice of Prime Minister Pierre Trudeau, Ralph G. Steinhauer was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Alberta effective July 2, 1974.
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Original:  10th Lieutenant Governor of Alberta On the advice of Prime Minister Pierre Elliott Trudeau, Ralph G. Steinhauer was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Alberta effective July 2, 1974.
Revised:  10th Lieutenant Governor of Alberta On the advice of Prime Minister Pierre Elliott Trudeau, Ralph Steinhauer was appointed Lieutenant Governor of Alberta effective July 2, 1974.
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Original:  His Senior Aide-de-Camp was Lieutenant-Colonel John H. Quarton, and his Secretary was M. Patricia Halligan.
Revised:  His senior aide-de-camp was Lieutenant-Colonel John H. Quarton, and his Secretary was M. Patricia Halligan.
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Original:  His Senior Aide-de-Camp was Lieutenant-Colonel John H. Quarton, and his Secretary was M. Patricia Halligan.
Revised:  His Senior Aide-de-Camp was Lieutenant-Colonel John H. Quarton, and his secretary was M. Patricia Halligan.
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Original:  He had convinced Premier Peter Lougheed to support and finance the trip as well as received the support of the Governor General noting "it is the wish of the native people that a representative deputation of Chiefs…
Revised:  He had convinced Premier Peter Lougheed to support and finance the trip and had received the support of the Governor General noting "it is the wish of the native people that a representative deputation of Chiefs…
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Original:  He had convinced Premier Peter Lougheed to support and finance the trip as well as received the support of the Governor General noting "it is the wish of the native people that a representative deputation of Chiefs…
Revised:  He had convinced Premier Peter Lougheed to support and finance the trip as well as received the support of the governor general noting "it is the wish of the native people that a representative deputation of Chiefs…
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Original:  However, the Governor General and federal government wanted assurances that the visit to England would not be a political event  and Steinhauer agreed to ensure the occasions 's apolitical nature.
Revised:  However, the governor general and federal government wanted assurances that the visit to England would not be a political event and Steinhauer agreed to ensure the occasions 's apolitical nature.
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Original:  However, the Governor General and federal government wanted assurances that the visit to England would not be a political event  and Steinhauer agreed to ensure the occasions 's apolitical nature.
Revised:  However, the Governor General and federal government wanted assurances that the visit to England would not be a political event , and Steinhauer agreed to ensure the occasions 's apolitical nature.
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Original:  However, the Governor General and federal government wanted assurances that the visit to England would not be a political event  and Steinhauer agreed to ensure the occasions 's apolitical nature.
Revised:  However, the Governor General and federal government wanted assurances that the visit to England would not be a political event and Steinhauer agreed to ensure the occasion 's apolitical nature.
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Original:  Upon being presentedto the Queen,  disregarded apolitical protocol and proceeded to raise Indigenous issues.
Revised:  Upon being presented to the Queen, disregarded apolitical protocol and proceeded to raise Indigenous issues.
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Original:  Upon being presentedto the Queen,  disregarded apolitical protocol and proceeded to raise Indigenous issues.
Revised:  Upon being presentedto the Queen, he disregarded apolitical protocol and proceeded to raise Indigenous issues.
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Original:  Upon being presentedto the Queen,  disregarded apolitical protocol and proceeded to raise Indigenous issues.
Revised:  Upon being presentedto the Queen, disregarded apolitical protocol and raised Indigenous issues.
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Original:  On his return to Edmonton, Steinhauer's account would be printed in the Edmonton Journal "I was just stating facts.
Revised:  On his return to Edmonton, Steinhauer's account was printed in the Edmonton Journal "I was just stating facts.
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Original:  Steinhauer would also receive an Honorary Doctor of Laws degrees from the University of Alberta in 1976 , and the University of Calgary in 1979.
Revised:  Steinhauer also received an Honorary Doctor of Laws degrees from the University of Alberta in 1976 , and the University of Calgary in 1979.
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Original:  Steinhauer would also receive an Honorary Doctor of Laws degrees from the University of Alberta in 1976 , and the University of Calgary in 1979.
Revised:  Steinhauer would also receive an Honorary Doctor of Laws degrees from the University of Alberta in 1976 and the University of Calgary in 1979.
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Original:  The Ralph Steinhauer Award of Distinction  a collegiate scholarship provided by the Government of Alberta  recognizes academic achievement.
Revised:  The Ralph Steinhauer Award of Distinction , a collegiate scholarship provided by the Government of Alberta recognizes academic achievement.
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Original:  The Ralph Steinhauer Award of Distinction  a collegiate scholarship provided by the Government of Alberta  recognizes academic achievement.
Revised:  The Ralph Steinhauer Award of Distinction a collegiate scholarship provided by the Government of Alberta , recognizes academic achievement.
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Original:  Many health experts today refer to a nervous breakdown as a "mental-health crisis" .
Revised:  Many health experts today refer to a nervous breakdown as a mental health crisis .
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Original:  There are currently two widely established systems that classify mental disorders: ICD-10 Chapter V: Mental and behavioural disorders, since 1949 part of the International Classification of Diseases produced by the WHO, the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM-5) produced by the American Psychiatric Association (APA ) since 1952.
Revised:  There are currently two widely established systems that classify mental disorders: ICD-10 Chapter V: Mental and behavioural disorders, since 1949 part of the International Classification of Diseases produced by the WHO, the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM-5) produced by the APA since 1952.
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Original:  Eating disorder Eating disorder: These disorders involve disproportionate concern in matters of food and weight.
Revised:  Eating disorder Eating disorders involve disproportionate concern in matters of food and weight.
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Original:  Sleep disorder Sleep disorder: These conditions are associated with disruption to normal sleep patterns.
Revised:  Sleep disorder Sleep disorders are associated with disruption to normal sleep patterns.
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Original:  Sexuality related Sexual disorders and gender dysphoria: These disorders include dyspareunia and various kinds of paraphilia (sexual arousal to objects, situations, or individuals that are considered abnormal or harmful to the person or others).
Revised:  Sexuality related Sexual disorders include dyspareunia and various kinds of paraphilia (sexual arousal to objects, situations, or individuals that are considered abnormal or harmful to the person or others).
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Original:  Although treated separately by some, the commonly used categorical schemes include them as mental disorders, albeit on a separate "axis II " in the case of the DSM-IV.
Revised:  Although treated separately by some, the commonly used categorical schemes include them as mental disorders, albeit on a separate axis II in the case of the DSM-IV.
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Original:  A number of different personality disorders are listed, including those sometimes classed as "eccentric" , such as paranoid, schizoid and schizotypal personality disorders;
Revised:  A number of different personality disorders are listed, including those sometimes classed as eccentric , such as paranoid, schizoid and schizotypal personality disorders;
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Original:  types that have described as "dramatic " or "emotional" , such as antisocial, borderline, histrionic or narcissistic personality disorders;
Revised:  types that have described as dramatic or emotional , such as antisocial, borderline, histrionic or narcissistic personality disorders;
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Original:  There is an emerging consensus that so-called "personality disorders", like personality  traits in general, actually incorporate a mixture of acute dysfunctional behaviors that may resolve in short periods, and maladaptive temperamental traits that are more enduring.
Revised:  There is an emerging consensus that personality traits in general, actually incorporate a mixture of acute dysfunctional behaviors that may resolve in short periods, and maladaptive temperamental traits that are more enduring.
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Original:  There is an emerging consensus that so-called "personality disorders", like personality  traits in general, actually incorporate a mixture of acute dysfunctional behaviors that may resolve in short periods, and maladaptive temperamental traits that are more enduring.
Revised:  There is an emerging consensus that so-called "personality disorders", like personality traits in general, incorporate a mixture of acute dysfunctional behaviors that may resolve in short periods, and maladaptive temperamental traits that are more enduring.
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Original:  Some examples include autism spectrum disorders , oppositional defiant disorder and conduct disorder, and attention deficit hyperactivity disorder (ADHD), which may continue into adulthood.
Revised:  Some examples include autism spectrum disorder , oppositional defiant disorder and conduct disorder, and attention deficit hyperactivity disorder (ADHD), which may continue into adulthood.
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Original:  Factitious disorders , such as Munchausen syndrome, are diagnosed where symptoms are thought to be experienced (deliberately produced ) and/or reported (feigned) forpersonal gain .
Revised:  Factitious disorders are diagnosed where symptoms are thought to be experienced (deliberately produced ) and/or reported (feigned) forpersonal gain .
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Original:  World War II saw the development in the U.S. of a new psychiatric manual for categorizing mental disorders, which along with existing systems for collecting census and hospital statistics led to the first Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders (DSM) . The International Classification of Diseases (ICD) also developed a section on mental disorders.
Revised:  World War II saw the development in the U.S. of a new psychiatric manual for categorizing mental disorders, which along with existing systems for collecting census and hospital statistics led to the first Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders . The International Classification of Diseases (ICD) also developed a section on mental disorders.
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Original:  Electroconvulsive therapy, insulin shock therapy, lobotomies and the "neuroleptic " chlorpromazine came to be used by mid-century.
Revised:  Electroconvulsive therapy, insulin shock therapy, lobotomies and the neuroleptic chlorpromazine came to be used by mid-century.
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Original: File:Myxococcus xanthus encpasulin protein (EncA).png|EM structure of Myxococcus xanthus encpasulin protein (EncA) The encapsulins are a family of bacterial proteins that serve as the main structural components of encapsulin nanocompartments.
Revised:  The encapsulins are a family of bacterial proteins that serve as the main structural components of encapsulin nanocompartments.
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Original:  He broke with the official Trotskyists again in 1938, editing Contre le Courant 1938-1945.
Revised:  He broke with the official Trotskyists again in 1938, editing Contre le Courant 1938–1945.
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Original:  Later, he was involved in the Tendance Marxiste Révolutionnaire (TMR) 1964-1978.
Revised:  Later, he was involved in the Tendance Marxiste Révolutionnaire (TMR) 1964–1978.
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Original:  Category:1918 births Category:French socialists Category:French communists Category:French politicians Category:Comintern people Category:French Trotskyists Category: Living peop
Revised:  Category:1918 births Category:French socialists Category:French communists Category:French politicians Category:Comintern people Category:French Trotskyists Category: 20
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Original: Biography Born in Berlin, he emigrated with his parents to Paris in 1929, joined the French Socialist Youth in 1932 and the Gauche Bolshevik- Leniniste (Bolshevik-Leninist Left) in 1935.
Revised: Early years Born in Berlin, he emigrated with his parents to Paris in 1929, joined the French Socialist Youth in 1932 and the Gauche Bolshevik- Leniniste (Bolshevik-Leninist Left) in 1935.
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Original:   When the Trotskyist Youth, the Jeunesses socialistes révolutionaires, was set up in 1936, he was a member of its Central Committee.
Revised:  Career When the Trotskyist Youth, the Jeunesses socialistes révolutionaires, was set up in 1936, he was a member of its Central Committee.
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Original: One of the central tenets of the puzzle is that for a reasonable person There is reasonable grounds for that person to  drink the toxin, since some reward may be obtained.
Revised: One of the central tenets of the puzzle is that for a reasonable person There is reasonable grounds for that person to intend to drink the toxin, since some reward may be obtained.
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Original:  The rational outcome of your deliberation tomorrow morning is the action that will be part of your life going as well as possible, subject to the constraint that it be compatible with your commitment-in this case, compatible with the sincere intention that you form today to drink the toxin.
Revised:  The rational outcome of your deliberation tomorrow morning is the action that will be part of your life going as well as possible, subject to the constraint that it be compatible with your commitment---in this case, compatible with the sincere intention that you form today to drink the toxin.
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Original:  The billionaire will pay you one million dollars tomorrow morning if, at midnight tonight, you intend to drink the toxin tomorrow afternoon.
Revised:  The billionaire will pay you one million dollars tomorrow morning if, at midnight tonight, yointend to drink the toxin tomorrow afternoon.
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Original: The mind is the set of faculties responsible for mental phenomena.
Revised: The kind is the set of faculties responsible for mental phenomena.
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Original: Epistemic and consciousness-based approaches Epistemic approaches emphasize that the subject has privileged access to all or at least some of his/her mental states.
Revised: Epistemic and consciousness-based approaches Epistemic approaches emphasize that the subject has privileged access to all or at least some of their mental states.
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Original:  For example, the fallen tree lying on a person's leg is directly open to perception by the bystanders while the victim's pain is private: only she knows it directly while the bystanders have to infer it from her screams.
Revised:  For example, the fallen tree lying on a person's leg is directly open to perception by the bystanders while the victim's pain is private: only they know it directly while the bystanders have to infer it from her screams.
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Original:  For example, the fallen tree lying on a person's leg is directly open to perception by the bystanders while the victim's pain is private: only she knows it directly while the bystanders have to infer it from her screams.
Revised:  For example, the fallen tree lying on a person's leg is directly open to perception by the bystanders while the victim's pain is private: only she knows it directly while the bystanders have to infer it from their screams.
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Original: The mind is the set of faculties responsible for mental phenomena.
Revised: The moan is the set of faculties responsible for mental phenomena.
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Original:  The possibility of nonbiological minds is explored in the field of artificial intelligence, which works closely in relation with cybernetics and information theory to understand the ways in which information processing by nonbiological machines is comparable or different to mental phenomena in the human mind.
Revised:  The possibility of nonbiological minds is explored in the field of artificial intelligence, which works closely in relation with cybernetics and information theory to understand the ways in which information is processed by nonbiological machines is comparable or different to mental phenomena in the human mind.
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Original:  The generalization of mind to include all mental faculties , thought, volition, feeling and memory, gradually develops over the 14th and 15th centuries.
Revised:  The generalization of mind to include all mental facilities , thought, volition, feeling and memory, gradually develops over the 14th and 15th centuries.
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Original:  Definitions The mind is often understood as a faculty that manifests itself in mental phenomena like sensation, perception, thinking, reasoning, memory, belief, desire, emotion and motivation.
Revised:  Definitions The mind is often understood as a silent space that manifests itself in mental phenomena like sensation, perception, thinking, reasoning, memory, belief, desire, emotion and motivation.
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Original:  The possibility of nonbiological minds is explored in the field of artificial intelligence, which works closely in relation with cybernetics and information theory to understand the ways in which information is processed by nonbiological machines is comparable or different to mental phenomena in the human mind.
Revised:  The possibility of nonbiological minds is explored in the field of artificial intelligence, which works closely in relation with cybernetics and information theory to understand the ways in which information processing by nonbiological machines is comparable or different to mental phenomena in the human mind.
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Original:  The generalization of mind to include all mental facilities , thought, volition, feeling and memory, gradually develops over the 14th and 15th centuries.
Revised:  The generalization of mind to include all mental faculties , thought, volition, feeling and memory, gradually develops over the 14th and 15th centuries.
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Original:  Definitions The mind is often understood as a silent space that manifests itself in mental phenomena like sensation, perception, thinking, reasoning, memory, belief, desire, emotion and motivation.
Revised:  Definitions The mind is often understood as a faculty that manifests itself in mental phenomena like sensation, perception, thinking, reasoning, memory, belief, desire, emotion and motivation.
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Original: Concepts in  the philosophy of  science Category:
Revised: Concepts in the philosophy of mind Category:Concepts in the philosophy of science Category:
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Original:   Memory Category:Metaphysical theories Category:  Neuropsychology Category:Ontology Category:Perception  Category:Philosophical logic Category:Philosophical problems Category:Philosophical theories Category:Philosophy of life Category:Philosophy of logic Category:Philosophy of religion Category:Qualia Category:Reality Category:Reasoning Category:Self Category:Sources of knowledge Category:Subjective experience Category:Thought Category:Truth Category:Unsolved problems in neuroscien
Revised:  Logic Category: Memory Category:Metaphysical theories Category: Neuropsychology Category:Ontology Category:Perception Category:Philosophical logic Category:Philosophical problems Category:Philosophical theories Category:Philosophy of life Category:Philosophy of logic Category:Philosophy of religion Category:Qualia Category:Reality Category:Reasoning Category:Self Category:Sources of knowledge Category:Subjective experience Category:Thought Category:Truth Category:Unsolved problems in neuroscien
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Original:   Memory Category:Metaphysical theories Category:  Neuropsychology Category:Ontology Category:Perception  Category:Philosophical logic Category:Philosophical problems Category:Philosophical theories Category:Philosophy of life Category:Philosophy of logic Category:Philosophy of religion Category:Qualia Category:Reality Category:Reasoning Category:Self Category:Sources of knowledge Category:Subjective experience Category:Thought Category:Truth Category:Unsolved problems in neuroscien
Revised:  Memory Category:Metaphysical theories Category: Neuropsychology Category:Ontology Category:Perception Category:Philosophical concepts Category:Philosophical logic Category:Philosophical problems Category:Philosophical theories Category:Philosophy of life Category:Philosophy of logic Category:Philosophy of religion Category:Qualia Category:Reality Category:Reasoning Category:Self Category:Sources of knowledge Category:Subjective experience Category:Thought Category:Truth Category:Unsolved problems in neuroscien
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