wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  "Drink and the Historians: Sober Reflections on Alcohol in New Zealand 1840-1914 ," New Zealand Journal of History (2010) 44#1 pp 35-53.
Revised:  "Drink and the Historians: Sober Reflections on Alcohol in New Zealand 1840–1914 ," New Zealand Journal of History (2010) 44#1 pp 35-53.
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Original:  "Drink and the Historians: Sober Reflections on Alcohol in New Zealand 1840-1914 ," New Zealand Journal of History (2010) 44#1 pp 35-53.
Revised:  "Drink and the Historians: Sober Reflections on Alcohol in New Zealand 1840-1914 ," New Zealand Journal of History (2010) 44#1 pp 35–53.
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Original:  Examines drinking patterns, why men drank, whether drinking was excessive compared to other countries, how drinking behavior evolved, and the social role of brewers and the pub owners.
Revised:  Examines drinking patterns, why men drank, whether drinking was excessive compared to other countries, how drinking behaviour evolved, and the social role of brewers and the pub owners.
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Original:  The Making of New Zealand Cricket: 1832-1914 (2004) excerpt and text search Religion and society Else, Anne, ed.
Revised:  The Making of New Zealand Cricket: 1832–1914 (2004) excerpt and text search Religion and society Else, Anne, ed.
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Original:  "The 'joy and heroism of doing good': The New Zealand Missionary" Record and Late-Nineteenth-Century Protestant Children's Missionary Support," Journal of New Zealand Literature: JNZL (2010) No. 28, Part 2: Special Issue: Cultures of Print in Colonial New Zealand pp. 158-182 Stenhouse, John.
Revised:  "The 'joy and heroism of doing good': The New Zealand Missionary" Record and Late-Nineteenth-Century Protestant Children's Missionary Support," Journal of New Zealand Literature: JNZL (2010) No. 28, Part 2: Special Issue: Cultures of Print in Colonial New Zealand pp. 158–182 Stenhouse, John.
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Original:  Fatal Necessity: British Intervention in New Zealand, 1830-47 (1978) Akenson, Donald Harman.
Revised:  Fatal Necessity: British Intervention in New Zealand, 1830–47 (1978) Akenson, Donald Harman.
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Original:  Half the World from Home: Perspectives on the Irish in New Zealand, 1860-1950 (Wellington, 1990) Arnold, Rollo.
Revised:  Half the World from Home: Perspectives on the Irish in New Zealand, 1860–1950 (Wellington, 1990) Arnold, Rollo.
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Original:  The farthest promised land: English villagers, New Zealand immigrants of the 1870s (1981) Borrie W. D. Immigration to New Zealand: 1854-1938 (Canberra: Australian National University, 1991) Bueltmann, Tanja.
Revised:  The farthest promised land: English villagers, New Zealand immigrants of the 1870s (1981) Borrie W. D. Immigration to New Zealand: 1854–1938 (Canberra: Australian National University, 1991) Bueltmann, Tanja.
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Original:  They organized sports teams to entice the young and preserved an idealized Scottish national myth (based on Robert Burns) for the elderly.
Revised:  They organised sports teams to entice the young and preserved an idealized Scottish national myth (based on Robert Burns) for the elderly.
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Original:  They organized sports teams to entice the young and preserved an idealized Scottish national myth (based on Robert Burns) for the elderly.
Revised:  They organized sports teams to entice the young and preserved an idealised Scottish national myth (based on Robert Burns) for the elderly.
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Original:  The Women's War: New Zealand Women 1939-45 (2001) argues that the Second World War was not a major turning point in the status of women Parsons, Gwen.
Revised:  The Women's War: New Zealand Women 1939–45 (2001) argues that the Second World War was not a major turning point in the status of women Parsons, Gwen.
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Original:  Political and External Affairs (1958) NZ official history Hall, D. O. W. "Women at War," in Episodes & Studies Volume 1 (Historical Publications Branch, Wellington, New Zealand, 1948) pp 1-33 online Historiography Austrin, Terry, and John Farnsworth.
Revised:  Political and External Affairs (1958) NZ official history Hall, D. O. W. "Women at War," in Episodes & Studies Volume 1 (Historical Publications Branch, Wellington, New Zealand, 1948) pp 1–33 online Historiography Austrin, Terry, and John Farnsworth.
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Original:  Tony Ballantyne, '‘ On Place, Space and Mobility in Nineteenth Century New Zealand ’' in The New Zealand Journal of History (2011)"
Revised:  Tony Ballantyne, On Place, Space and Mobility in Nineteenth Century New Zealand ’' in The New Zealand Journal of History (2011)"
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Original:  Tony Ballantyne, '‘ On Place, Space and Mobility in Nineteenth Century New Zealand ’' in The New Zealand Journal of History (2011)"
Revised:  Tony Ballantyne, '‘ On Place, Space and Mobility in Nineteenth Century New Zealand in The New Zealand Journal of History (2011)"
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Original:  Responding to Maori arguments that the colonial narrative of Pakeha history was a device to privilege the legitimacy of British colonization , Belich wrote a radically bicultural story.
Revised:  Responding to Maori arguments that the colonial narrative of Pakeha history was a device to privilege the legitimacy of British colonisation , Belich wrote a radically bicultural story.
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Original:  Primary sources and oral histories New Zealand Official Yearbook annual 1893-2008 Fraser, Lyndon, and Katie Pickles, eds.
Revised:  Primary sources and oral histories New Zealand Official Yearbook annual 1893–2008 Fraser, Lyndon, and Katie Pickles, eds.
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Original:  Hamer  David.
Revised:  Hamer , David.
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Original:  A Social and Political History of New Zealand, 1918–1939 (Wellington: A. H. & A. W. Reed, 1965) Burdon, R. M. King Dick: A Biography of Richard John Seddon (Christchurch: Whitcombe and Tombs, 1955) Davis, Richard.
Revised:  A Social and Political History of New Zealand, 1918–1939 (Wellington: A. H. & A. W. Reed, 1965) Davis, Richard.
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Original:  To shore up his support from Chad's expanding urban elite, Tombalbaye Africanized the names of several places (Fort-Lamy and FortArchambault became N'Djamena and Sarh, respectively) and ordered civil servants to use indigenous names in place of their European ones;
Revised:  To shore up his support from Chad's expanding urban elite, Tombalbaye Africanized the names of several places (Fort-Lamy and Fort Archambault became N'Djamena and Sarh, respectively) and ordered civil servants to use indigenous names in place of their European ones;
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Original:  Rebellion in Chad%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On November 1, 1965, frustration with what was perceived as government mismanagement and tax collection abuses erupted in riots in the town of Mangalmé in Guéra Prefecture.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On November 1, 1965, frustration with what was perceived as government mismanagement and tax collection abuses erupted in riots in the town of Mangalmé in Guéra Prefecture.
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Original:  The Work History of Richard Todwong In 2011, he entered elected politics by contesting for the Nwoya County Constituency in the Parliament of Uganda.
Revised:  In 2011, he entered elected politics by contesting for the Nwoya County Constituency in the Parliament of Uganda.
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Original:  Richard Todwong: A Man In The Limelight
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Original: In June 2021, he was appointment Secretary General of the National Resistance Movement by the party chair man and President of Uganda after serving for five years as the deputy party secretary general.
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Original: The Battles of La Güera and Tichla took place between 10–22 December 1975, when Mauritanian Army forces invaded the southern part of Western Sahara, which was the zone agreed to be annexed by Mauritania in the Madrid Accords.
Revised: The Battles of La Güera and Tichla took place between 10–22 December 1975, when the Mauritanian Army invaded the southern part of Western Sahara, which was the zone agreed to be annexed by Mauritania in the Madrid Accords.
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Original:  The malware had a logic bomb which triggered the master boot record and data wiping payload at 11:08am local time on Wednesday, August , 15.
Revised:  The malware had a logic bomb which triggered the master boot record and data wiping payload at 11:08am local time on Wednesday, August 15.
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Original:  However a Middle Eastern journalist leaked photographs taken on 1 September 2012 showing kilometers of petrol trucks unable to be loaded due to backed business systems still inoperable.
Revised:  However a Middle Eastern journalist leaked photographs taken on 1 September 2012 showing kilometers of petrol trucks unable to be loaded due to hacked business systems still inoperable.
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Original:  The post contained the username and password on security and network equipment and the new password for Aramco CEO Khalid Al-Falih  The attackers also referenced a portion of the Shamoon malware as further proof in the pastie:
Revised:  The post contained the username and password on security and network equipment and the new password for Aramco CEO Khalid Al-Falih . The attackers also referenced a portion of the Shamoon malware as further proof in the pastie:
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Original: Shamoon , () also known as W32.
Revised: Shamoon (), also known as W32.
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Original:  It was later described as the "biggest hack in history . " 
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Original:  It was later described as the "biggest hack in history . " 
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Original: The malware was unique, used to target the Saudi government by causing destruction to the state owned national oil company Saudi Aramco  .
Revised: The malware was unique, used to target the Saudi government by causing destruction to the state-owned national oil company Saudi Aramco .
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Original: Xavier Guerrero ( b. December 3, 1896 San Pedro de las Colonias, Coahuila – d. June 29, 1974 Mexico City) was one of the pioneers of the Mexican muralism movement in the early 20th century.
Revised: Xavier Guerrero ( December 3, 1896 San Pedro de las Colonias, Coahuila – d. June 29, 1974 Mexico City) was one of the pioneers of the Mexican muralism movement in the early 20th century.
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Original: Xavier Guerrero ( b. December 3, 1896 San Pedro de las Colonias, Coahuila – d. June 29, 1974 Mexico City) was one of the pioneers of the Mexican muralism movement in the early 20th century.
Revised: Xavier Guerrero ( b. December 3, 1896 San Pedro de las Colonias, Coahuila – June 29, 1974 Mexico City) was one of the pioneers of the Mexican muralism movement in the early 20th century.
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Original: Recogniztions include one major prize, first place at the International Competition of Contemporary Furniture Design sponsored by the Museum of Modern Art in New York.
Revised: Recognitions include one major prize, first place at the International Competition of Contemporary Furniture Design sponsored by the Museum of Modern Art in New York.
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Original: The Philosophical Lexicon is a humourous dictionary  by philosopher Daniel Dennett.
Revised: The Philosophical Lexicon is a humourous dictionary edited by philosopher Daniel Dennett.
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Original:  It lists neologisms that have been humorously coined from the names of  contemporary philosophers.
Revised:  It lists neologisms that have been humorously coined from the names of (mostly) contemporary philosophers.
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Original: The Philosophical Lexicon is a humorous dictionary edited by philosopher Daniel Dennett  .
Revised: The Philosophical Lexicon is a humorous dictionary founded by philosopher Daniel Dennett .
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Original:  For example, the following definition refers to the philosopher W. V. O. Quine:quine, v. (1) To deny resolutely the existence of importance of something real or significant.
Revised:  For example, the following definition refers to the philosopher W. V. O. Quine:quine, v. (1) To deny resolutely the existence or importance of something real or significant.
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Original:   Cancer is generally not contagious in humans, though it can be caused by oncoviruses and cancer bacteria.
Revised:  The 20th century has been increasing more and more exposure to chemicals(gmo’s), radiation from WiFi’s and more and more stress related to overload of work and lifestyle, more travelling more pollution. All these chemicals, our seperation from Nature and all the changes to our environment have influenced drastically in our bodies namely Cancer growth. Cancer is generally not contagious in humans, though it can be caused by oncoviruses and cancer bacteria.
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Original:  Most cancers are related to environmental, lifestyle, or behavioral exposures , In the current generation, the most common cause for cancer is said to be TikTok . Cancer is generally not contagious in humans, though it can be caused by oncoviruses and cancer bacteria.
Revised:  Most cancers are related to environmental, lifestyle, or behavioral exposures . Cancer is generally not contagious in humans, though it can be caused by oncoviruses and cancer bacteria.
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Original:  Participation in Operation Ranchhand in Vietnam during the Vietnam war, or living near a golf course, or living on a farm would increase the risk of non-Hodgkins lymphoma due to exposure to the chemical 2,4-D (C3H8NO5P, also known as glyphosate) .
Revised:  Participation in Operation Ranchhand in Vietnam during the Vietnam war, or living near a golf course, or living on a farm would increase the risk of non-Hodgkins lymphoma due to exposure to the chemical 2,4-D .
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Original:  When 2,4-D is mixed with another chimical pesticide / herbicide, 2,4-T, at a 50:50 ratio, they are collectively known as Agent Orange.
Revised:  When 2,4-D is mixed with another chemical pesticide or herbicide, 2,4-T, at a 50:50 ratio, they are collectively known as Agent Orange.
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Original: Managerial Epidemiology The use of epidemiological tools in health care management can be described as managerial epidemiology.
Revised:  The use of epidemiological tools in health care management can be described as managerial epidemiology.
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Original:  These include: History The potential value of epidemiology in health care management has long been recognized . . Academics were encouraging use of epidemiological methods in health care management for quality improvement and planning before the term ‘managerial epidemiology’ was coined.
Revised:  These include: History The potential value of epidemiology in health care management has long been recognized . Academics were encouraging use of epidemiological methods in health care management for quality improvement and planning before the term ‘managerial epidemiology’ was coined.
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Original:  This indeed was anticipated by authors of textbooks on managerial epi . (See Dever).
Revised:  This indeed was anticipated by authors of textbooks on managerial epidemiology . (See Dever).
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% resubmission
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Original:  (See for example Rohrer 1989.) Epidemiology became a required subject in  health care management programs and textbooks were written for those courses.
Revised:  (See for example Rohrer 1989.) Epidemiology became a required subject in some health care management programs and textbooks were written for those courses.
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Original:  Instead, they would extract clinical information from medical records to analyze variations in outcomes, complications, and services used   .
Revised:  Instead, they would extract clinical information from medical records to analyze variations in outcomes, complications, and services used . .
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Original: Category:GenresCategory:CultureCategory:ArtsCategory:Mass media "Genre-busting" is a term used occasionally in reviews of written work, music and visual art and refers to the author or artist's ability to cross over two or more established styles.
Revised:  "Genre-busting" is a term used occasionally in reviews of written work, music and visual art and refers to the author or artist's ability to cross over two or more established styles.
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Original:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre  Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com  Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
Revised:  Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
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Original:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre  Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com  Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
Revised:  See also %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
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Original:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre  Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com  Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
Revised:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Musical genre Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
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Original:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre  Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com  Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
Revised:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre See also Genre fiction Literary fiction Musical genre Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
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Original:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre  Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com  Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
Revised:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre Art genres External links TVtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
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Original:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre  Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com  Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
Revised:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
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Original:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre  Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com  Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
Revised:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
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Original:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre  Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com  Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
Revised:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Definition from dictionary.reference.com Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
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Original:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre  Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com  Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
Revised:  See also Genre fiction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Literary fiction Musical genre Art genres External links Tvtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian Newspaper article: Genre Busting Genre Busting definition from The Free Dictionary Genre Busting definition from dictionary.reference.com Definition from Collins Dictionary Genre Busting definition from Collins Dictiona
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Original:  So much so that genre-busting within the publishing world has become a type of literary fiction.
Revised:  So genre-busting within the publishing world has become a type of literary fiction.
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Original:  External links TVtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian newspaper article: Genre Busting Definition from The Free Dictionary Definition from dictionary.reference.com Definition from Collins Dictionary
Revised:  External links TVtropes article: Genre Busting Guardian newspaper article: Genre Busting 
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