wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Riccardo Rosa URL Il Diurno Venezia, un luogo dove il tempo si è fermato, Corriere della Sera, 17 March 2014 The convention for the concession for thirty years of the square was signed on November 24, 1923 by the  assessor to building of Milan Municipality Cesare Chiodi and the engineers Troiani, Cavacini and Masini  referring to a project of  engineer Troiani.
Revised:  Riccardo Rosa URL Il Diurno Venezia, un luogo dove il tempo si è fermato, Corriere della Sera, 17 March 2014 The convention for the concession for thirty years of the square was signed on November 24, 1923 by the assessor to building of Milan Municipality Cesare Chiodi and the engineers Troiani, Cavacini and Masini referring to a project of the engineer Troiani.
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Original:  Over the Diurno it was forecasted to build a monument to Guglielmo Oberdan , that was never built.
Revised:  A monument above it to Guglielmo Oberdan was planned but never built.
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Original:  The square, called before Piazzale Venezia, was dedicated to Guglielmo Oberdan on July 19, 1923.
Revised:  The square, previously called Piazzale Venezia, was dedicated to Guglielmo Oberdan on July 19, 1923.
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Original:  The decorations, the furniture and a part of the general architecture has been attributed to architect Piero Portaluppi.
Revised:  The decorations, the furniture and a part of the general architecture have been attributed to architect Piero Portaluppi.
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Original:  Tra conoscenza e restauro, a cura di Cesare Renzo Romeo, L’Artistica Editrice, Savigliano, 2013 From the main entrance towards  corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure.
Revised:  Tra conoscenza e restauro, a cura di Cesare Renzo Romeo, L’Artistica Editrice, Savigliano, 2013 From the main entrance towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure.
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Original:  The platform roof towards  corso Buenos Aires has been removed when the subway line 1 has been built in the fifties.
Revised:  The platform roof towards the corso Buenos Aires has been removed when the subway line 1 has been built in the fifties.
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Original: From the main entrance  towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure .
Revised: In the main entrance towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure .
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Original: From the main entrance  towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure .
Revised: From the main entrance area, heading towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure .
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Original: From the main entrance  towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure .
Revised: From the main entrance towards the corso Buenos Aires , one could find a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure .
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Original: From the main entrance  towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure .
Revised: From the main entrance towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer , and the entry to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure .
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Original: From the main entrance  towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers for men and women, manicure and pedicure .
Revised: From the main entrance towards the corso Buenos Aires one could enter in the entrance, occupied in the last years by a travel agency and a photographer and to the main hall with two side naves where there were barbers , manicurists and pedicurists .
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Original:  Over the access staircases there were two platform roofs but only the one towards via Tadino has been conserved, but without the covering glasses .
Revised:  Over the access staircases there were two platform roofs but only the one towards via Tadino has been conserved, but without the covering glass .
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Original:  The platform roof towards the corso Buenos Aires has been removed when the subway line 1 has been built in the fifties.
Revised:  The platform roof towards the corso Buenos Aires was removed when the subway line 1 has been built in the fifties.
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Original:  The platform roof towards the corso Buenos Aires has been removed when the subway line 1 has been built in the fifties.
Revised:  The platform roof towards the corso Buenos Aires has been removed when the subway line 1 was built in the fifties.
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Original:  The access to the Diurno has been opened from the staircase to the subway.
Revised:  The access to the Diurno was opened from the staircase to the subway.
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Original:  In 1985 the baths have been shut down.
Revised:  In 1985 the baths were shut down.
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Original:  In 1990 the structure has been given in concession to the Consorzio Oberdan Servizi, created by the artisans that worked there.
Revised:  In 1990 the structure was given in concession to the Consorzio Oberdan Servizi, created by the artisans that worked there.
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Original:  Most of the artisans left the Diurno in the middle of the years 1990, selling a part of the furniture that they considered their own.
Revised:  Most of the artisans left the Diurno in the middle of 1990, selling a part of the furniture that they considered their own.
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Original:  The last barber for men, Carmine Aiello, was sent away by Milan Municipality on June 16, 2006 because of a legal cause .
Revised:  The last barber for men, Carmine Aiello, was sent away by Milan on June 16, 2006 because of a legal cause .
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Original:  The last barber for men, Carmine Aiello, was sent away by Milan Municipality on June 16, 2006 because of a legal cause .
Revised:  The last barber for men, Carmine Aiello, was sent away by Milan Municipality on June 16, 2006 , for legal reasons .
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Original:  Afterwards, following the break of a skylight in glass by the wheel of a cleaning truck  the skylights were covered with asphalt outside and reinforced inside.
Revised:  Afterwards, following the break of a skylight by the wheel of a cleaning truck the skylights were covered with asphalt outside and reinforced inside.
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Original:  Afterwards, following the break of a skylight in glass by the wheel of a cleaning truck  the skylights were covered with asphalt outside and reinforced inside.
Revised:  Afterwards, following the break of a skylight in glass by the wheel of a cleaning truck , the skylights were covered with asphalt outside and reinforced inside.
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Original:  The project was stopped by architect Italo Rota, who became in 1996 assessor to the urban quality in the Giunta Formentini and planned its transformation in a shop, conserving the hall, as a part of a project of renewal of Piazza Oberdan and modification of the Porta Venezia station of the subway line 1.
Revised:  The project was stopped by architect Italo Rota, who became in 1996 assessor to urban quality in the Giunta Formentini and planned its transformation in a shop, conserving the hall, as a part of a project of renewal of Piazza Oberdan and modification of the Porta Venezia station of the subway line 1.
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Original:  The Regional Direction for the Beaux Arts of Lombardy has put the Diurno under restriction as a national monument on October 25, 2005. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Milan Province , starting from year 2000, asked for the Diurno to the Municipality to link it to Spazio Oberdan and put offices and archives of the Cineteca Italiana.
Revised:  The Regional Direction for the Beaux Arts of Lombardy has put the Diurno under restriction as a national monument on October 25, 2005. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Milan province , starting from year 2000, asked for the Diurno to the Municipality to link it to Spazio Oberdan and put offices and archives of the Cineteca Italiana.
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Original:  The Regional Direction for the Beaux Arts of Lombardy has put the Diurno under restriction as a national monument on October 25, 2005. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Milan Province , starting from year 2000, asked for the Diurno to the Municipality to link it to Spazio Oberdan and put offices and archives of the Cineteca Italiana.
Revised:  The Regional Direction for the Beaux Arts of Lombardy has put the Diurno under restriction as a national monument on October 25, 2005. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Milan Province , starting from year 2000, asked for the Diurno for the municipality to link it to Spazio Oberdan and put offices and archives of the Cineteca Italiana.
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Original:  The Municipal Government approved on February 3, 2006  the text of an agreement 25 years long with the Province , but the Province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
Revised:  The municipal government approved on February 3, 2006 the text of an agreement 25 years long with the Province , but the Province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
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Original:  The Municipal Government approved on February 3, 2006  the text of an agreement 25 years long with the Province , but the Province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
Revised:  The Municipal Government approved on February 3, 2006 , the text of an agreement 25 years long with the Province , but the Province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
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Original:  The Municipal Government approved on February 3, 2006  the text of an agreement 25 years long with the Province , but the Province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
Revised:  The Municipal Government approved on February 3, 2006 the text of a 25-year agreement with the province , but the Province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
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Original:  The Municipal Government approved on February 3, 2006  the text of an agreement 25 years long with the Province , but the Province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
Revised:  The Municipal Government approved on February 3, 2006 the text of an agreement 25 years long with the Province , but the province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
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Original:  An attempt of the Province to start in 2010 a Programma Integrato di Intervento with the Lombardy Region, the Ferrovie dello Stato Italiane and Atm was abandoned for lack of interest by the various institutions.
Revised:  An attempt of the province to start in 2010 a Programma Integrato di Intervento with the Lombardy Region, the Ferrovie dello Stato Italiane and Atm was abandoned for lack of interest by the various institutions.
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Original:  An attempt of the Province to start in 2010 a Programma Integrato di Intervento with the Lombardy Region, the Ferrovie dello Stato Italiane and Atm was abandoned for lack of interest by the various institutions.
Revised:  An attempt of the Province to start in 2010 a Programma Integrato di Intervento with the Lombardy Region, the Ferrovie dello Stato Italiane and ATM was abandoned for lack of interest by the various institutions.
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Original:  The property of the structure has remained to Milan Municipality which thought to restore it with its own funds, at least for the hall of the artisans or as an alternative the emission of a bid to rent it to private organizations.
Revised:  The property of the structure has remained to Milan municipality which thought to restore it with its own funds, at least for the hall of the artisans or as an alternative the emission of a bid to rent it to private organizations.
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Original:  The property of the structure has remained to Milan Municipality which thought to restore it with its own funds, at least for the hall of the artisans or as an alternative the emission of a bid to rent it to private organizations.
Revised:  The property of the structure has remained to Milan Municipality which thought to restore it with its own funds, at least for the hall of the artists or as an alternative the emission of a bid to rent it to private organizations.
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Original: History Article on the inauguration of the Diurno on the daily newspaper il Secolo of 19 January 1926 (first column from the right) Advertisement of the Diurno on the daily newspaper la Sera of 29 March 1926 (second column from the right) Price list of 1926 from the advertisement of the Diurno on the Guida Savallo It was planned and built between 1923 and 1925 and opened on January 18 , URL L’Albergo Diurno Venezia: un progetto dell’architetto Piero Portaluppi?
Revised: History Article on the inauguration of the Diurno on the daily newspaper il Secolo of 19 January 1926 (first column from the right) Advertisement of the Diurno on the daily newspaper la Sera of 29 March 1926 (second column from the right) Price list of 1926 from the advertisement of the Diurno on the Guida Savallo It was planned and built between 1923 and 1925 and opened on 18 , URL L’Albergo Diurno Venezia: un progetto dell’architetto Piero Portaluppi?
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Original: As written on the advertisements in the newspapers of the time, like the newspaper la Sera of 29/3/26 in this picture: Riccardo Rosa URL Il Diurno Venezia, un luogo dove il tempo si è fermato, Corriere della Sera, 17 March 2014 The convention for the concession for thirty years of the square was signed on November 24 , 1923 by the Milan municipal assessor to building, Cesare Chiodi, and the engineers Troiani, Cavacini and Masini, referring to a project of the engineer Troiani.
Revised: As written on the advertisements in the newspapers of the time, like the newspaper la Sera of 29/3/26 in this picture: Riccardo Rosa URL Il Diurno Venezia, un luogo dove il tempo si è fermato, Corriere della Sera, 17 March 2014 The convention for the concession for thirty years of the square was signed on 24 , 1923 by the Milan municipal assessor to building, Cesare Chiodi, and the engineers Troiani, Cavacini and Masini, referring to a project of the engineer Troiani.
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Original: As written on the advertisements in the newspapers of the time, like the newspaper la Sera of 29/3/26 in this picture: Riccardo Rosa URL Il Diurno Venezia, un luogo dove il tempo si è fermato, Corriere della Sera, 17 March 2014 The convention for the concession for thirty years of the square was signed on November 24 , 1923 by the Milan municipal assessor to building, Cesare Chiodi, and the engineers Troiani, Cavacini and Masini, referring to a project of the engineer Troiani.
Revised: As written on the advertisements in the newspapers of the time, like the newspaper la Sera of 29/3/26 in this picture: Riccardo Rosa URL Il Diurno Venezia, un luogo dove il tempo si è fermato, Corriere della Sera, 17 March 2014 The convention for the concession for thirty years of the square was signed on November 24 November 1923 by the Milan municipal assessor to building, Cesare Chiodi, and the engineers Troiani, Cavacini and Masini, referring to a project of the engineer Troiani.
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Original:  The square, previously called Piazzale Venezia, was dedicated to Guglielmo Oberdan on July 19 , 1923.
Revised:  The square, previously called Piazzale Venezia, was dedicated to Guglielmo Oberdan on 19 , 1923.
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Original:  The last barber for men, Carmine Aiello, was sent away by Milan on June 16 , 2006, for legal reasons.
Revised:  The last barber for men, Carmine Aiello, was sent away by Milan on 16 , 2006, for legal reasons.
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Original:  The Regional Direction for the Beaux Arts of Lombardy has put the Diurno under restriction as a national monument on October 25 , 2005.
Revised:  The Regional Direction for the Beaux Arts of Lombardy has put the Diurno under restriction as a national monument on 25 , 2005.
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Original:  The municipal government approved on February 3, 2006, the text of a 25-year agreement with the province, but the province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
Revised:  The municipal government approved the text of a 25-year agreement with the province, but the province never signed it because the money was used for the restoration of the spires of the Duomo di Milano.
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Original:  Following the publication of a study by Stefano Masi and Pierfrancesco Sacerdoti attributing to Portaluppi the project of the furniture, the Fondo Ambiente Italiano (FAI) and Fondazione Portaluppi have organized a convention on the Diurno at Villa Necchi February 4 , 2014.
Revised:  Following the publication of a study by Stefano Masi and Pierfrancesco Sacerdoti attributing to Portaluppi the project of the furniture, the Fondo Ambiente Italiano (FAI) and Fondazione Portaluppi have organized a convention on the Diurno at Villa Necchi for 4 , 2014.
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Original:  Following the publication of a study by Stefano Masi and Pierfrancesco Sacerdoti attributing to Portaluppi the project of the furniture, the Fondo Ambiente Italiano (FAI) and Fondazione Portaluppi have organized a convention on the Diurno at Villa Necchi February 4 , 2014.
Revised:  Following the publication of a study by Stefano Masi and Pierfrancesco Sacerdoti attributing to Portaluppi the project of the furniture, the Fondo Ambiente Italiano (FAI) and Fondazione Portaluppi have organized a convention on the Diurno at Villa Necchi February 4 February 2014.
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Original:  December 4 , 2015 the Municipality inaugurated the western side of piazza Oberdan over the Diurno, with the creation of a pedestrian area and the restoration of the columns and the platform roof under the monitoring of the Soprintendenza Belle Arti e Paesaggio di Milano .see press release by Comune di Milano URL
Revised:  On 4 , 2015 the Municipality inaugurated the western side of piazza Oberdan over the Diurno, with the creation of a pedestrian area and the restoration of the columns and the platform roof under the monitoring of the Soprintendenza Belle Arti e Paesaggio di Milano .see press release by Comune di Milano URL
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Original:  The art shows that the people really focused on the body and what they represented in terms of fertility and even had a ceremony called Chinamwali Chachikulu or the "great initiation" when women were experiencing their first pregnancy.
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Original:  Cultivation, rearing of cattle and smelting of iron were the main economic activities of this culture        .
Revised:  Cultivation, rearing o cattle and smelting of iron were the main economic activities of this culture .
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Original:  Cultivation, rearing of cattle and smelting of iron were the main economic activities of this culture        .
Revised:  Cultivation, rearing of cattle and smelting of iron were the main economic activities of this culture . .
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Original: Map of Malawi with regions, major cities and other destinations noted|405x405px People first began to be interested in Malawi's prehistoric past in the 1920's.
Revised:  People first began to be interested in Malawi's prehistoric past in the 1920's.
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Original: Uraha Hill Uraha Hill is a paleoanthropoloigcal site in  northern Malawi.
Revised: Uraha Hill Uraha Hill is a paleoanthropoloigcal site in Uraha Hill, northern Malawi.
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Original:  Cultivation, rearing o cattle and smelting of iron were the main economic activities of this culture.
Revised:  Cultivation, rearing of cattle and smelting of iron were the main economic activities of this culture.
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Original:  Chongoni Rock Art Area This area is located in the Central Region of Malawi consisting of 127 sites and possibly more.
Revised:  Chongoni Rock Art Area The Chongoni Rock Art Area is located in the Central Region of Malawi consisting of 127 sites and possibly more.
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Original:  This culture can be found north and east of the Mulanje Massif, in the lower Shire area, one the Ntaja-Namwera hills and the Shire highlands. . At many of the sites, stone tools were found so it is believed that the people of the Longwe culture are hunter-gatherers but, they still produced ceramics.
Revised:  This culture can be found north and east of the Mulanje Massif, in the lower Shire area, one the Ntaja-Namwera hills and the Shire highlands. At many of the sites, stone tools were found so it is believed that the people of the Longwe culture are hunter-gatherers but, they still produced ceramics.
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Original:  This culture can be found north and east of the Mulanje Massif, in the lower Shire area, one the Ntaja-Namwera hills and the Shire highlands. . At many of the sites, stone tools were found so it is believed that the people of the Longwe culture are hunter-gatherers but, they still produced ceramics.
Revised:  This culture can be found north and east of the Mulanje Massif, in the lower Shire area, one the Ntaja-Namwera hills and the Shire highlands. . At many of the sites, stone tools were found so it is believed that the people of the Longwe culture are hunter-gatherers , but they still produced ceramics.
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Original:  Cultivation , rearing of cattle and smelting of iron were the main economic activities of this culture.
Revised:  Farming , rearing of cattle and smelting of iron were the main economic activities of this culture.
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Original:  This evidence resulted in Desmond J. Clark's hypothesis about the site being a butchery site.
Revised:  This evidence resulted in J. Desmond Clark's hypothesis about the site being a butchery site.
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