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Original:  Hence eventually, Iran's parliament in Tehran was shelled by General Liakhoff of Imperial Russia, and the American Morgan Shuster was forced to resign under tremendous British and Russian pressures .
Revised:  Hence eventually, Iran's parliament in Tehran was shelled by General Liakhoff of Imperial Russia, and the American Morgan Shuster was forced to resign under tremendous British and Russian diplomatic pressure .
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Original:  The central theme is the tenacity with which he applies himself to the task of creating a viable administrative apparatus to collect taxes, the sine qua non of creating a nationalist government capable of resisting imperialism .
Revised:  The central theme is the tenacity with which he applies himself to the task of creating a viable administrative apparatus to collect taxes, the sine qua non of creating a nationalist government capable of resisting foreign powers .
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Original:  The book was subtitled, the story of the European diplomacy and oriental intrigue that resulted in the denationalization of twelve million Mohammedans, a personal URL The dedication of the book reads thus:
Revised:  The book was subtitled, the story of the European diplomacy and oriental intrigue that resulted in the denationalization of twelve million Mohammedans, a personal narrative. The dedication of the book reads thus:
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Original:  She died 14 April 2010 at the age of 105 in Wilmington NC   .
Revised:  She died 14 April 2010 at the age of 105 in Wilmington NC . .
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Original: Television Year Show Role Ref .2002 –
Revised: Television Year Show Role Ref (s) 2002 –
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Original:  2003Shaka Laka Boom Boom Piya 2003 Kkusum Simran Kkoi Dil Mein Hai Preeti 2004 Karthika Karthika 2005– 2008Kasautii Zindagii Kay Sneha Bajaj 2006 Kyaa Hoga Nimmo Kaa NatashaKahaani Ghar Ghar Kii Herself 2007 Kahin To Hoga Svetlana2007 –
Revised:  2003 Shaka Laka Boom Boom Piya 2003 Kkusum Simran Kkoi Dil Mein Hai Preeti 2004 Karthika Karthika 2005– 2008Kasautii Zindagii Kay Sneha Bajaj 2006 Kyaa Hoga Nimmo Kaa NatashaKahaani Ghar Ghar Kii Herself 2007 Kahin To Hoga Svetlana2007 –
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Original:  2003Shaka Laka Boom Boom Piya 2003 Kkusum Simran Kkoi Dil Mein Hai Preeti 2004 Karthika Karthika 2005– 2008Kasautii Zindagii Kay Sneha Bajaj 2006 Kyaa Hoga Nimmo Kaa NatashaKahaani Ghar Ghar Kii Herself 2007 Kahin To Hoga Svetlana2007 –
Revised:  2003Shaka Laka Boom Boom Piya 2003 Kkusum Simran Kkoi Dil Mein Hai Preeti 2004 Karthika Karthika 2005– 2007 Kasautii Zindagii Kay Sneha Bajaj 2006 Kyaa Hoga Nimmo Kaa NatashaKahaani Ghar Ghar Kii Herself 2007 Kahin To Hoga Svetlana2007 –
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Original:  2003Shaka Laka Boom Boom Piya 2003 Kkusum Simran Kkoi Dil Mein Hai Preeti 2004 Karthika Karthika 2005– 2008Kasautii Zindagii Kay Sneha Bajaj 2006 Kyaa Hoga Nimmo Kaa NatashaKahaani Ghar Ghar Kii Herself 2007 Kahin To Hoga Svetlana2007 –
Revised:  2003Shaka Laka Boom Boom Piya 2003 Kkusum Simran Kkoi Dil Mein Hai Preeti 2004 Karthika Karthika 2005– 2008Kasautii Zindagii Kay Sneha Bajaj 2006 Kyaa Hoga Nimmo Kaa Natasha Kahaani Ghar Ghar Kii Herself 2007 Kahin To Hoga Svetlana2007 –
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Original:  2003Shaka Laka Boom Boom Piya 2003 Kkusum Simran Kkoi Dil Mein Hai Preeti 2004 Karthika Karthika 2005– 2008Kasautii Zindagii Kay Sneha Bajaj 2006 Kyaa Hoga Nimmo Kaa NatashaKahaani Ghar Ghar Kii Herself 2007 Kahin To Hoga Svetlana2007 –
Revised:  2003Shaka Laka Boom Boom Piya 2003 Kkusum Simran Kkoi Dil Mein Hai Preeti 2004 Karthika Karthika 2005– 2008Kasautii Zindagii Kay Sneha Bajaj 2006 Kyaa Hoga Nimmo Kaa NatashaKahaani Ghar Ghar Kii Herself 2007 Kahin To Hoga Svetlana 2007 –
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Original:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
Revised:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1 Contestant 2009 Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
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Original:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
Revised:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 Contestant Perfect Bride Finale Performer Dill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
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Original:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
Revised:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta 2010 Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
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Original:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
Revised:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2 Host 2011 Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
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Original:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
Revised:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala Host Nachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
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Original:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012Teri Meri Love StoriesNeeti2013 –
Revised:  2009SangamGanga Bhatia2008Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1Contestant 2009Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 ContestantDill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta2009Perfect BrideFinale Performer2010Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2Host 2011Zor Ka Jhatka: Total Wipeout Contestant Comedy Ka Maha Muqabala HostNachle Ve with Saroj Khan 2012 Teri Meri Love Stories Neeti 2013 –
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Original: 2014 SaraswatichandraKumud Desai2016 – 2017Beyhadh Maya Mehrotra2016The Kapil Sharma ShowGuest2018Silsila Badalte Rishton Ka 2018BepannaahZoya Siddiqui2019 – 2020Beyhadh 2Maya Jaisingh
Revised: 2014 SaraswatichandraKumud Desai2016 – 2017Beyhadh Maya Mehrotra2016The Kapil Sharma ShowGuest2018Silsila Badalte Rishton Ka 2018BepannaahZoya Siddiqui2019 – 2020 Beyhadh 2 Maya Jaisingh 2020 Ishaaron Ishaaron Mein Guest (as Maya)
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Original:  Ek Pyara Sa Bandhan Guest (as Ganga) 2008 Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1 Contestant 2009 Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke  Comedy Circus 3 Contestant Perfect Bride Finale Performer Dill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta 2010 Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2 Host 2011 Zor Ka Jhatka:
Revised:  Ek Pyara Sa Bandhan Guest (as Ganga) 2008 Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1 Contestant 2009 Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke </ref> Comedy Circus 3 Contestant Perfect Bride Finale Performer Dill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta 2010 Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2 Host 2011 Zor Ka Jhatka:
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Original:  Ek Pyara Sa Bandhan Guest (as Ganga) 2008 Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1 Contestant 2009 Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke </ref> Comedy Circus 3 Contestant Perfect Bride Finale Performer Dill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta 2010 Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2 Host 2011 Zor Ka Jhatka:
Revised:  Ek Pyara Sa Bandhan Guest (as Ganga) 2008 Zara Nach Ke Dikha 1 Contestant 2009 Dekh India Dekh Host Laughter Ke Phatke Comedy Circus 3 Contestant Perfect Bride Finale Performer Dill Mill Gayye Dr. Riddhima Gupta 2010 Zara Nach Ke Dikha 2 Host 2011 Zor Ka Jhatka:
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Original: Year Award Category Nominated Work Results Reference2007Indian Telly AwardsBest Supporting ActressKasautii Zindagii Kay2013Gold AwardsMost Fit ActressIndian Television Academy AwardsBest Actress (Drama)SaraswatichandraBest Actress (Popular)2014Indian Telly AwardsBest Actress (Jury)Best Actress in a Lead Role2016Asiavision Television AwardsBest Actress2017Lions Gold AwardsBest Actress (Jury)
Revised: Year Award Category Nominated Work Results Reference2007Indian Telly AwardsBest Supporting ActressKasautii Zindagii Kay2013Gold AwardsMost Fit ActressIndian Television Academy AwardsBest Actress (Drama)SaraswatichandraBest Actress (Popular)2014Indian Telly AwardsBest Actress (Jury)Best Actress in a Lead Role2016Asiavision Television AwardsBest Actress2017Indian Television Academy AwardsBest Actress (Jury)
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Original:  BeyhadhIndian Television Academy Awards2018Gold AwardsBest Actress (Jury)BepannahIndian Television Academy AwardsBest Actress (Popular)Best Actress (Drama) 2019Lions Gold AwardsBest Actress (Popular)Indian Telly AwardsBest Actress in Lead RoleBest Jodi (With Harshad Chopda)2020Filmfare OTT AwardsBest Actor Series: Drama (Female)Code M
Revised:  2018Gold AwardsBest Actress (Jury)BepannahIndian Television Academy AwardsBest Actress (Popular)Best Actress (Drama) 2019Lions Gold AwardsBest Actress (Popular)Indian Telly AwardsBest Actress in Lead RoleBest Jodi (With Harshad Chopda)2020Filmfare OTT AwardsBest Actor Series: Drama (Female)Code M
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Original:  BeyhadhIndian Television Academy Awards2018Gold AwardsBest Actress (Jury)BepannahIndian Television Academy AwardsBest Actress (Popular)Best Actress (Drama) 2019Lions Gold AwardsBest Actress (Popular)Indian Telly AwardsBest Actress in Lead RoleBest Jodi (With Harshad Chopda)2020Filmfare OTT AwardsBest Actor Series: Drama (Female)Code M
Revised:  BeyhadhIndian Television Academy Awards2018Gold AwardsBest Actress (Jury)BepannahIndian Television Academy AwardsBest Actress (Popular)Best Actress (Drama) 2019Indian Telly AwardsBest Actress in Lead RoleBest Jodi (With Harshad Chopda)2020Filmfare OTT AwardsBest Actor Series: Drama (Female)Code M
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Original: Al-Bahrani adopted the Akbhari school, rejecting his early usuli schooling in Bahrain.
Revised: Al-Bahrani adopted the Akbhari school, rejecting his early Usuli schooling in Bahrain.
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Original: Juan Cole, Sacred Space and Holy War, IB Tauris, 2007 p67 Category:Shia clerics Category:Twelvers Category:History of Bahrain Category:Karbala Category:Bahrani people Category:Bahraini Shia Muslims Category:Bahraini ayatollahs Category:1772 deaths Category:1695 births Category:Bahrani nobili
Revised: Juan Cole, Sacred Space and Holy War, IB Tauris, 2007 p67 Category:Shia clerics Category:Twelvers Category:History of Bahrain Category:Karbala Category:Bahraini Shia Muslims Category:Bahraini ayatollahs Category:1772 deaths Category:1695 births Category:Bahrani nobili
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Original:  Specifically, he represented to the California Aggie as follows: “It was suspicious in nature, but we cannot reveal any more information than that because it could impact the investigation .%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% " It is not precisely known what the "suspicious materials" were, but it is likely that they included the sorts of things that arsonists would use in order to deliberately burn coffee kiosks, such as, for example, matches.
Revised:  Specifically, he represented to the California Aggie as follows: “It was suspicious in nature, but we cannot reveal any more information than that because it could impact the investigation %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% " It is not precisely known what the "suspicious materials" were, but it is likely that they included the sorts of things that arsonists would use in order to deliberately burn coffee kiosks, such as, for example, matches.
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Original:  The California Aggie article also confirmed the widely used nature of the then-erstwhile kiosk, noting that "most law students buy coffee, milk,%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tea or pastries from the kiosk on a daily basis."
Revised:  The California Aggie article also confirmed the widely used nature of the then-erstwhile kiosk, noting that "most law students buy coffee, %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tea or pastries from the kiosk on a daily basis."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% According to the following article from UCDavis.edu dated May 7, 2010 - source: URL - the fire was considered to be arson, and there is no mention of student involvement or the activities of any religiously affiliated group.
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Original: UC Davis School of Law is the smallest of the five law schools in the University of California system, with a total enrollment of just under 600 students.
Revised: UC Davis School of Law is the smallest of the five law schools in the University of California system, with a total enrollment of under 600 students.
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Original:  critical legal theory scholar Robert W. Hillman, Professor of Law, Fair Business Practices and Investor Advocacy Chair  Edward Imwinkelried, Edward L. Barrett Jr. Professor of Law Kevin Johnson, Dean and Mabie-Apallas Professor of Public Interest Law and Chicana/o Studies, specialist in civil rights, immigration, and Chicano/a rights law Miguel Méndez, Professor of Law, evidence law scholar Terry O'Neill, President, National Organization for Women, acting professor of law 1988–1989.
Revised:  critical legal theory scholar Robert W. Hillman, Professor of Law, Fair Business Practices and Investor Advocacy Chair , Professor Emeritus Edward Imwinkelried, Edward L. Barrett Jr. Professor of Law Kevin Johnson, Dean and Mabie-Apallas Professor of Public Interest Law and Chicana/o Studies, specialist in civil rights, immigration, and Chicano/a rights law Miguel Méndez, Professor of Law, evidence law scholar Terry O'Neill, President, National Organization for Women, acting professor of law 1988–1989.
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Original:  Rex R. Perschbacher, Daniel J. Dykstra Endowed Chair, former Dean of the Law School , 1998-2008  Cruz Reynoso, Associate Justice of the California Supreme Court 1982–1987, Professor Emeritus Martha West, former Associate Dean;
Revised:  Rex R. Perschbacher, Daniel J. Dykstra Endowed Chair, former Dean of the Law School ( 1998-2008 Cruz Reynoso, Associate Justice of the California Supreme Court 1982–1987, Professor Emeritus Martha West, former Associate Dean;
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Original:  He was a Member of National Assembly of Quebec for the riding of Abitibi-Est, representing the Parti Québécois.
Revised:  He was a member of National Assembly of Quebec for the riding of Abitibi-Est, representing the Parti Québécois.
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Original:  He was the president of the Youth aboriginal council and an administrator at the Abitibi-Témiscamingue youth forum.
Revised:  He was the president of the youth aboriginal council and an administrator at the Abitibi-Témiscamingue youth forum.
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Original:  In december 1th 2013, he was elected as councillor in the Abenakis of Odanak council.
Revised:  On December 1, 2013, he was elected as councillor in the Abenakis of Odanak council.
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Original: After studying at Cégep de l'Abitibi-Témiscamingue , Wawanoloath worked as a technician in social work at the l'Or-et-des-Bois School Board, an educator at a child daycare centre and a host for the Centre polyvalent pour jeunes autochthones in Val-d'Or.
Revised: After studying at Cégep de l'Abitibi-Témiscamingue . Wawanoloath worked as a technician in social work at the l'Or-et-des-Bois School Board, an educator at a child daycare centre and a host for the Centre polyvalent pour jeunes autochthones in Val-d'Or.
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Original: Alexis Wawanoloath (born July 15, 1982 in Val-d'Or, Quebec ) is a Canadian politician.
Revised: Alexis Wawanoloath (born July 15, 1982 ) is a Canadian politician.
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Original: Corneliu Mănescu ( February 8 , 1916 – June 26 , 2000) was a Romanian diplomat born in Ploiești.
Revised: Corneliu Mănescu ( 8 , 1916 – June 26 , 2000) was a Romanian diplomat born in Ploiești.
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Original: Corneliu Mănescu ( February 8 , 1916 – June 26 , 2000) was a Romanian diplomat born in Ploiești.
Revised: Corneliu Mănescu ( February 8 February 1916 – June 26 , 2000) was a Romanian diplomat born in Ploiești.
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Original: Corneliu Mănescu ( February 8 , 1916 – June 26 , 2000) was a Romanian diplomat born in Ploiești.
Revised: Corneliu Mănescu ( February 8 , 1916 – 26 , 2000) was a Romanian diplomat born in Ploiești.
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Original:  He died in a hospital on June 26 , 2000 in Bucharest, Romania.
Revised:  He died in a hospital on 26 , 2000 in Bucharest, Romania.
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Original:  Other important posts he held were that of vice president of the United Socialist Front, president of the Romanian Group of the Inter-Parliamentary Union, ambassador to France ( 1977-1982 ).
Revised:  Other important posts he held were that of vice president of the United Socialist Front, president of the Romanian Group of the Inter-Parliamentary Union, ambassador to France ( 1977–1982 ).
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Original:  In 1952 he was named head of the Army's Central Military Club, and in 1959 as chief of the Higher Political Division of the Army, with the rank of major general.
Revised:  In 1952 he was named head of the Army's Central Military Club, and in 1959 he was named chief of the Higher Political Division of the Army, with the rank of major general.
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Original: ]] Social support is the percipience and fact that one is cared for, has help available from other people, and most knowingly , that one is part of a caring communel complex.
Revised: ]] Social support is the perception and actuality that one is cared for, has help available from other people, and most knowingly , that one is part of a caring communel complex.
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Original: ]] Social support is the percipience and fact that one is cared for, has help available from other people, and most knowingly , that one is part of a caring communel complex.
Revised: ]] Social support is the percipience and fact that one is cared for, has assistance available from other people, and most knowingly , that one is part of a caring communel complex.
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Original: ]] Social support is the percipience and fact that one is cared for, has help available from other people, and most knowingly , that one is part of a caring communel complex.
Revised: ]] Social support is the percipience and fact that one is cared for, has help available from other people, and most popularly , that one is part of a caring communel complex.
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Original:  This support can come from many sources, such as family, friends, pets, neighbors, coworkers, organizations, etc.
Revised:  Support can come from many sources, such as family, friends, pets, neighbors, coworkers, organizations, etc.
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Original:  It is also referred to as "esteem support" or "appraisal support . " 
Revised:  Formerly, it was also referred to as "esteem support" or "appraisal support . " 
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Original:  It is also referred to as "esteem support" or "appraisal support . " 
Revised:  It is also referred to as "esteem support" or "appraisal support , " 
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Original: Online social support Wong, E. T. K., Ma, W. W. K. Exploring Relationship between Online Social Support and URL Social support is also available among social media sites.
Revised: Online social support Ma, W. W. K. Exploring Relationship between Online Social Support and URL Social support is also available among social media sites.
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Original: Online social support Wong, E. T. K., Ma, W. W. K. Exploring Relationship between Online Social Support and URL Social support is also available among social media sites.
Revised: Online social support Wong, E. T. K., Social support is also available among social media sites.
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Original:  According to Hwang, the support is  similar to face-to-face social support, but also offers the unique aspects of convenience, anonymity, and non-judgmental interactions.
Revised:  According to Hwang, the support is similar to face-to-face social support, but may also offer convenience, anonymity, and non-judgmental interactions.
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Original:   Support sought through social media also provides users with emotional comfort that relates them to others while creating awareness about particular health issues.
Revised:  Online sources such as social media may be less redundant sources of social support for users with relatively little in-person support compared to persons with high in-person support. Online sources may be especially important as potential social support resources for individuals with limited offline support, and may be related to physical and psychological well-being. However, socially isolated individuals may also be more drawn to computer-mediated vs. in-person forms of interaction, which may contribute to bidirectional associations between online social activity and isolation or depression. Support sought through social media also provides users with emotional comfort that relates them to others while creating awareness about particular health issues.
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Original:   Support sought through social media also provides users with emotional comfort that relates them to others while creating awareness about particular health issues.
Revised:  Support sought through social media can also provide users with emotional comfort that relates them to others while creating awareness about particular health issues.
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