wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  In attack pace and skill of newcomer Frank Ribery ripped Brazilian defence open and Zidane found him time and  again.
Revised:  In attack pace and skill of newcomer Frank Ribery ripped Brazilian defence open and Zidane found him time and time again.
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Original: Thierry Henry , who also appeared in the finals eight years ago, scored the only goal of the game 12 minutes after half-time.
Revised: Thierry Henry scored the only goal of the game 12 minutes after half-time.
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Original:  "   The world is threatened by the hegemony of the North American empire," said Chavez, following speeches which had criticized colonialism;
Revised:  " " The world is threatened by the hegemony of the North American empire," said Chavez, following speeches which had criticized colonialism;
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Original:  speeches made by African leaders  
Revised:  speeches made by African leaders . 
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Original: According to a study released June 17 by Catholic Relief Services(a U.S. aid agency) "Governments in Sub-Saharan Africa will earn more than $200 billion in oil revenue over the next decade." and "Exploitation of the continent's untapped reserves may encourage conflict and graft" "The world is threatened by the hegemony of the North American empire," said Chavez, following speeches which had criticized colonialism;
Revised:  "The world is threatened by the hegemony of the North American empire," said Chavez, following speeches which had criticized colonialism;
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Original:  He has also praised the leader of Iran in his policies against the U.S and raised taxes significantly on oil companies in Venezuela . Critics say that some of his policies have been partially responsible for the increase in oil prices for people in the USA
Revised:  He has also praised the leader of Iran in his policies against the U.S and raised taxes significantly on oil companies in Venezuela 
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Original:  Michaelle Jean noted Canada's prosperity, including in her remarks a thank you to the people who toil to provide the country with a safe and plentiful food supply.
Revised:  Michaëlle Jean noted Canada's prosperity, including in her remarks a thank you to the people who toil to provide the country with a safe and plentiful food supply.
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Original:   External links category:Politics and conflicts category:Obituaries category:Japan category:As
Revised:  He was 68 years old. External links category:Politics and conflicts category:Obituaries category:Japan category:As
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Original: Although only diagnosed in one man so far, this mutated version of the virus progresses to AIDS faster than other forms of HIV, officials said.
Revised: Although diagnosed in only one man so far, this mutated version of the virus progresses to AIDS faster than other forms of HIV, officials said.
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Original:  Diagnosed with HIV in mid-October, the unnamed New York City man developed  full-blown form of drug resistant and largely untreatable AIDS by mid-January ;
Revised:  Diagnosed with HIV in mid-October, the unnamed New York City man developed the full-blown form of drug resistant and largely untreatable AIDS by mid-January ;
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Original:  Diagnosed with HIV in mid-October, the unnamed New York City man developed  full-blown form of drug resistant and largely untreatable AIDS by mid-January ;
Revised:  Diagnosed with HIV in mid-October, the unnamed New York City man developed full-blown form AIDS by mid-January ;
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Original:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control  , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease  .
Revised:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection can take up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease .
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Original:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control  , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease  .
Revised:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease .
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Original:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control  , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease  .
Revised:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control Prevention (CDC) , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease .
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Original:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control  , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease  .
Revised:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control , told the New York Times this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease .
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Original:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control  , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease  .
Revised:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique because of the rapid progression of the disease .
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Original:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control  , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease  .
Revised:  a mere three months . Normally HIV infection takes up to 10 years to develop into AIDS , health officials said . Dr. Ronald O. Valdiserri, the director of HIV/AIDS prevention at the Centers for Disease Control , told the New York Times that this new strain of virus is unique due to the fact that it is resistant to multiple forms of AIDS drugs and the rapid course of the disease and its resistance to multiple AIDS drug regimens .
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Original:  Although the New York case appears to be isolated at this time, the CDC has sent out a nation-wide alert to health departments in every state.
Revised:  Although the New York case appears to be isolated at this time, the CDC has sent a nation-wide alert to health departments in every state.
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Original:  He also said that all sexually active people should be tested for the HIV virus.
Revised:  He also said all sexually active people should be tested for the HIV virus.
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Original: A bomber in a truck blew up Al-Ula market in Sadr City and left 66 killed and over 100 injured, Saturday.
Revised: A suicide bomber exploded a truck bomb in the crowded Al-Ula market in Sadr City and left 66 killed and over 100 injured, Saturday.
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Original: A bomber in a truck blew up Al-Ula market in Sadr City and left 66 killed and over 100 injured, Saturday.
Revised: A bomber in a truck blew up Al-Ula market in Sadr City and left 66 people and injuring over a 100.
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Original:  'At the beginning of this market , the criminal blew up his dynamite-packed truck after trying to go over the pavement,' said Iraq's Deputy Health Minister Sabah al-Hussein.
Revised:  The explosion happened when a police patrol was passing by and caused heavy casualties in the morning market rush. Some shoppers were sent flying on top of nearby two-storey buildings.
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Original:  It was the deadliest bombing of civilians since Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki's government assume responsibility for domestic security in May, 2006.
Revised:  It was the deadliest bombing of civilians since Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki's government assumed responsibility for domestic security in May, 2006.
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Original:  The driver of the truck blew himself up in the explosion . Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Iraq Category:Middle Eas
Revised:  The driver of the truck blew himself up in the explosion Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Iraq Category:Middle Eas
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Original:  The driver of the truck blew himself up in the explosion . Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Iraq Category:Middle Eas
Revised:  The driver of the truck blew himself up in the explosion . 
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Original:  Rescuers were left to pick through a sickening scene of human remains mixed in with exploded vegetable matter and dead animals . 'At the beginning of this market, the criminal blew up his dynamite-packed truck after trying to go over the pavement,' said Iraq's Deputy Health Minister Sabah al-Hussein .
Revised:  Rescuers were left to pick through a sickening scene of human remains mixed in with exploded vegetable matter and dead animals 'At the beginning of this market, the criminal blew up his dynamite-packed truck after trying to go over the pavement,' said Iraq's Deputy Health Minister Sabah al-Hussein .
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Original:  Rescuers were left to pick through a sickening scene of human remains mixed in with exploded vegetable matter and dead animals . 'At the beginning of this market, the criminal blew up his dynamite-packed truck after trying to go over the pavement,' said Iraq's Deputy Health Minister Sabah al-Hussein .
Revised:  Rescuers were left to pick through a sickening scene of human remains mixed in with exploded vegetable matter and dead animals . .
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Original:  Later, a number of forums eventually began to offer this chance for revenue to their own contributors, starting with Digitalpoint .
Revised:  Later, a number of forums eventually began to offer this chance for revenue to their own contributors, starting with Digitalpoint 
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Original:  Allyourideas.com also offers a means on each relevant page for Paypal donations to be received by the site founder and most frequent editor .
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Original:  "It would probably be big enough to wipe out a small country," he said    .
Revised:  "It would probably be big enough to wipe out a small country," he said . .
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Original: Asteroid 2004 XP14, a half-mile wide chunk of hard rock travelling at 40 000 miles an hour, will miss the Earth by a few hundred thousand miles, early Mondaymorning .
Revised: Asteroid 2004 XP14, a half-mile wide chunk of hard rock travelling at 40 000 miles an hour, will miss the Earth by a few hundred thousand miles, Monday .
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Original:  "It would probably be big enough to wipe out a small country," he said .
Revised:  "It would probably be big enough to wipe out a small country," he said 
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Original:  This development allows detailed information, that was only ever available though an information request to Police, to now be seen immediately and desired statistics can be manipulated interactivel 
Revised:  This development allows detailed information, that was only ever available though an information request to Police, to now be seen immediately and desired statistics can be manipulated interactively. 
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Original: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
Revised: David Beckham, a football player for England and the Real Madrid football club, has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
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Original: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
Revised: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he no longer wishes to be the captain of England's football team . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
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Original: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
Revised: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterday's (1 July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
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Original: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
Revised: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quarter-final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
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Original: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
Revised: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press conference at the team's training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
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Original: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
Revised: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he stands down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
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Original: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
Revised: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his position of captain immediately but would remain a part of the England squad .
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Original: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England squad .
Revised: DAVID Beckham, the England and Real Madrid has announced he is to quit as the National team captain . After the teams exit to Portgual in yesterdays (1st July 2006) World Cup quater final , Beckham announced at a press confrence at the teams training camp in Germany that he would stand down from his captaincy with immediate effect but would remain a part of the England team .
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Original:  He said : "I hoped to make it on the back of a successful World Cup.
Revised:  He said , "I hoped to make it on the back of a successful World Cup.
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Original:  " This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date but after discussing it with my family and those close to me I feel the time is right."
Revised:  This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date but after discussing it with my family and those close to me I feel the time is right."
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Original:  Beckham was made captain by caretaker manager , Peter Taylor, in 2000 and had served 58 games of his 92 caps as the national captain  --CitizenGale 19:24, 2 July 2006 (UT
Revised:  Beckham became the captain in 2000 by caretaker manager , Peter Taylor, in 2000 and had served 58 games of his 92 caps as the national captain --CitizenGale 19:24, 2 July 2006 (UT
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Original:  Beckham was made captain by caretaker manager , Peter Taylor, in 2000 and had served 58 games of his 92 caps as the national captain  --CitizenGale 19:24, 2 July 2006 (UT
Revised:  Beckham was made captain by caretaker manager Peter Taylor. He had served 58 games of his 92 caps as the national captain --CitizenGale 19:24, 2 July 2006 (UT
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Original:  Beckham was made captain by caretaker manager , Peter Taylor, in 2000 and had served 58 games of his 92 caps as the national captain  --CitizenGale 19:24, 2 July 2006 (UT
Revised:  Beckham was made captain by caretaker manager , Peter Taylor, in 2000 and had served 58 games of the 92 caps as the national captain --CitizenGale 19:24, 2 July 2006 (UT
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Original:  Beckham was made captain by caretaker manager , Peter Taylor, in 2000 and had served 58 games of his 92 caps as the national captain  --CitizenGale 19:24, 2 July 2006 (UT
Revised:  Beckham was made captain by caretaker manager , Peter Taylor, in 2000 and had served 58 games of his 92 caps as the national captain . --CitizenGale 19:24, 2 July 2006 (UT
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Original: He said, "I hoped to make it on the back of a successful World Cup.
Revised:  "I hoped to make it on the back of a successful World Cup.
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Original:  This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date but after discussing it with my family and those close to me I feel the time is right . " 
Revised:  This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date but after discussing it with my family and those close to me I feel the time is right , " 
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Original:  This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date but after discussing it with my family and those close to me I feel the time is right . " 
Revised:  This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date but after discussing it with my family and those close to me I feel the time is right . " he said.
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Original: "I hoped to make it on the back of a successful World Cup.
Revised: "I came to this decision some time ago but I had hoped to announce it on the back of a successful World Cup.
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Original:  Sadly , that wasn't to be.
Revised:  Sadly that wasn't to be.
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Original:  This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date but after discussing it with my family and those close to me I feel the time is right," he said.
Revised:  This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date . But after discussing it with my family and those close to me I feel the time is right," he said.
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Original:  This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date but after discussing it with my family and those close to me I feel the time is right," he said.
Revised:  This decision has been the most difficult of my career to date but after discussing it with my family and those closest to me I feel the time is right," he said.
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