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Original: Seal culling in Namibia is a contentious issues , with animal rights groups opposing the practise as brutal, but the government supporting it and claiming the seal population may damage the fishing industry which is strategic to the Namibian economy.
Revised: Seal culling in Namibia is a contentious issue , with animal rights groups opposing the practise as brutal, but the government supporting it and claiming the seal population may damage the fishing industry which is strategic to the Namibian economy.
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Original: Seal culling in Namibia is a contentious issues , with animal rights groups opposing the practise as brutal, but the government supporting it and claiming the seal population may damage the fishing industry which is strategic to the Namibian economy.
Revised: Seal culling in Namibia is a contentious issues , with animal rights groups opposing the practice as brutal, but the government supporting it and claiming the seal population may damage the fishing industry which is strategic to the Namibian economy.
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Original:  This seal harvest takes place in three places namely, Cape Cross, Wolf Bay and Atlas URL
Revised:  This seal harvest takes place in three places namely, Cape Cross, Wolf Bay and Atlas Bay.
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Original:  Critics also note that the profits from seal hunting are small compared to those of other Namibian industries, with seal watching bringing in more than seal harvesting does . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Campbell, R, Knowles, T., O’Connor, S., 2011.
Revised:  Critics also note that the profits from seal hunting are small compared to those of other Namibian industries, with seal watching bringing in more than seal harvesting does References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Campbell, R, Knowles, T., O’Connor, S., 2011.
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Original:  Critics also note that the profits from seal hunting are small compared to those of other Namibian industries, with seal watching bringing in more than seal harvesting does . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Campbell, R, Knowles, T., O’Connor, S., 2011.
Revised:  Critics also note that the profits from seal hunting are small compared to those of other Namibian industries, with seal watching bringing in more than seal harvesting does . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Campbell, R, Knowles, T., O’Connor, S., 2011.
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Original:  Category:Animal culling Category:Economy of Namibia Category:History of Namibia Namib
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Original:  Along with Canada and Greenland, Namibia is  the last places where seals are hunted for commercial purposes.
Revised:  Along with Canada and Greenland, Namibia is one of the last places where seals are hunted for commercial purposes.
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Original:  Novelist Paul Hazoumé's first novel Doguicimi (1938) was based on decades of research into the oral traditions of the Kingdom of Dahomey during  King Ghezo.
Revised:  Novelist Paul Hazoumé's first novel Doguicimi (1938) was based on decades of research into the oral traditions of the Kingdom of Dahomey during the reign of King Ghezo.
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Original: Before the Kingdom of Dahomey Prior to the centralization of the kingdom of Dahomey, the evidence suggests that the Abomey plateau was settled by a number of small tribes, commonly known as the Gedevi.
Revised: Before the Kingdom of Dahomey Prior to the centralization of the kingdom of Dahomey, the evidence suggests that the Abromey plateau was settled by a number of small tribes, commonly known as the Gedevi.
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Original:  To the east of the Abomey plateau, the Oyo Empire (in present-day Nigeria) was at the peak of its power and exercised some hegemony over the tribes in the area.
Revised:  To the east of the Abromey plateau, the Oyo Empire (in present-day Nigeria) was at the peak of its power and exercised some hegemony over the tribes in the area.
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Original:  Second, the city of Abeokuta was founded in 1825 and rose to prominence as a safe haven for people to be safe from the slave raids by Dahomey.
Revised:  Second, the city of Abeokuta was found in 1825 and rose to prominence as a safe haven for people to be safe from the slave raids by Dahomey.
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Original:  They sent multiple diplomatic parties to Ghezo to try to convince him to end Dahomey's participation in the  trade, all of these were rebuffed with Ghezo worried of the political consequences of ending such trade.
Revised:  They sent multiple diplomatic parties to Ghezo to try to convince him to end Dahomey's participation in the slave trade, all of these were rebuffed with Ghezo worried of the political consequences of ending such trade.
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Original:  Second , the city of Abeokuta was found in 1825 and rose to prominence as a safe haven for people to be safe from the slave raids by Dahomey.
Revised:  Secondly , the city of Abeokuta was found in 1825 and rose to prominence as a safe haven for people to be safe from the slave raids by Dahomey.
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Original:   Irakli Garibashvili, acting Prime Minister of Georgia and a close confident of Ivanishvili 's father, is heard encouraging the retributions on the covertly recorded tapes.
Revised:  Prime Minister Irakli Garibashvili, acting Prime Minister of Georgia and a close confident of Ivanishvili 's father, is heard encouraging the retributions on the covertly recorded tapes.
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Original:   Irakli Garibashvili, acting Prime Minister of Georgia and a close confident of Ivanishvili 's father, is heard encouraging the retributions on the covertly recorded tapes.
Revised:  Irakli Garibashvili, who is a close confident of Ivanishvili 's father, is heard encouraging the retributions on the covertly recorded tapes.
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Original: Singles Year Title2011"My Favourite Things""Don't Worry""Georgian Dream""Hip Hop Waltz"2012"Gpirdepi""Otsnebebis ghame"2013"Summertime" (featuring Lil Playy)"Samudamod" 2014"Calypso Lover"2015"Don't Go""I Look Good on You"2016"Shining like a Star ""Tickets to the Movies""
Revised: Singles Year Title2011"My Favourite Things""Don't Worry""Georgian Dream""Hip Hop Waltz"2012"Gpirdepi""Otsnebebis ghame"2013"Summertime" (featuring Lil Playy)"Samudamod" 2014"Calypso Lover"2015"Don't Go""I Look Good on You"2016"Shining like a Starzzz ""Tickets to the Movies""
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Original: English-language singers from Georgia (country) Category:Expatriates from Georgia (country) in France Category:Expatriates from Georgia (country) in the United States Category:Living people Category:Male singers from Georgia (country) Category:Musicians from Tbilisi Category:People with albinism Category:Pop singers from Georgia (country) Category:Rappers from Georgia (country) Category:Record producers from Georgia (country) Category:Singers from Paris Category:21st-century  male singe
Revised: English-language singers from Georgia (country) Category:Expatriates from Georgia (country) in France Category:Expatriates from Georgia (country) in the United States Category:Living people Category:Male singers from Georgia (country) Category:Musicians from Tbilisi Category:People with albinism Category:Pop singers from Georgia (country) Category:Rappers from Georgia (country) Category:Record producers from Georgia (country) Category:Singers from Paris Category:21st-century French male singe
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Original: English-language singers from Georgia (country) Category:Expatriates from Georgia (country) in France Category:Expatriates from Georgia (country) in the United States Category:Living people Category:Male singers from Georgia (country) Category:Musicians from Tbilisi Category:People with albinism Category:Pop singers from Georgia (country) Category:Rappers from Georgia (country) Category:Record producers from Georgia (country) Category:Singers from Paris Category:21st-century French male singe
Revised: English-language singers from Georgia (country) Category:Expatriates from Georgia (country) in France Category:Expatriates from Georgia (country) in the United States Category:Living people Category:Musicians from Tbilisi Category:People with albinism Category:Pop singers from Georgia (country) Category:Rappers from Georgia (country) Category:Record producers from Georgia (country) Category:Singers from Paris Category:21st-century French male singe
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Original: Military Career He joined the South African Army in 1962.
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Original:  He also commanded the School of Armour from 11 January 1980 to 18 December 1983.
Revised:  He also commanded the School of Armour from 11 January 1981 to 18 December 1983.
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Original: Massacre of Mueda On 16 June 1960, Makonde nationalists organized a demonstration in front of the Mueda District headquarters on the Mueda town square demanding independence from Portugal , apparently the district administrator had invited them to present their grievances.
Revised: Massacre of Mueda On 16 June 1960, Makonde nationalists organized a demonstration in front of the Mueda District headquarters on the Mueda town square in order to demand independence from Portugal , apparently the district administrator had invited them to present their grievances.
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Original: Massacre of Mueda On 16 June 1960, Makonde nationalists organized a demonstration in front of the Mueda District headquarters on the Mueda town square demanding independence from Portugal , apparently the district administrator had invited them to present their grievances.
Revised: Massacre of Mueda On 16 June 1960, Makonde nationalists organized a demonstration in front of the Mueda District headquarters on the Mueda town square demanding independence from Portugal . Apparently the district administrator had invited them to present their grievances.
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Original:  Ethnographies of suspicion in the new world order Duke University Press, Durham, North Carolina, page 103, ISBN 0-8223-3036-9 The Portuguese administrator ordered his pre-assembled troops to fire on the crowd,Newitt, Malyn D. D. (1995) A History of Mozambique Indiana University Press, Bloomington, Indiana, page 521, ISBN 0-253-34006-3 and then many more were thrown to their death into a ravine.
Revised:  Ethnographies of suspicion in the new world order Duke University Press, Durham, North Carolina, page 103, ISBN 0-8223-3036-9 The Portuguese administrator ordered his pre-assembled troops to fire on the crowd,Newitt, Malyn D. D. (1995) A History of Mozambique Indiana University Press, Bloomington, Indiana, page 521, ISBN 0-253-34006-3 after which many more were thrown to their death into a ravine.
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Original:  Identity Tokens, Sorcery, and Other Metaphors in the 1994 Mozambican Elections" pp. 92-124 In West, Harry G. (editor) (2003) Transparency and Conspiracy: Ethnographies of suspicion in the new world order Duke University Press, Durham, North Carolina, page 120, note 31, ISBN 0-8223-3036-9 However, resentment generated by these events led ultimately to independentist guerrilla FRELIMO gaining needed momentum in the outset of the Mozambican War of Independence (1964–1975).
Revised:  Identity Tokens, Sorcery, and Other Metaphors in the 1994 Mozambican Elections" pp. 92-124 In West, Harry G. (editor) (2003) Transparency and Conspiracy: Ethnographies of suspicion in the new world order Duke University Press, Durham, North Carolina, page 120, note 31, ISBN 0-8223-3036-9 However, resentment generated by these events ultimately led to the independentist guerrilla organization FRELIMO gaining needed momentum in the outset of the Mozambican War of Independence (1964–1975).
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Original:  Identity Tokens, Sorcery, and Other Metaphors in the 1994 Mozambican Elections" pp. 92-124 In West, Harry G. (editor) (2003) Transparency and Conspiracy: Ethnographies of suspicion in the new world order Duke University Press, Durham, North Carolina, page 120, note 31, ISBN 0-8223-3036-9 However, resentment generated by these events led ultimately to independentist guerrilla FRELIMO gaining needed momentum in the outset of the Mozambican War of Independence (1964–1975).
Revised:  Identity Tokens, Sorcery, and Other Metaphors in the 1994 Mozambican Elections" pp. 92-124 In West, Harry G. (editor) (2003) Transparency and Conspiracy: Ethnographies of suspicion in the new world order Duke University Press, Durham, North Carolina, page 120, note 31, ISBN 0-8223-3036-9 However, resentment generated by these events led ultimately to independentist guerrilla FRELIMO gaining needed momentum at the outset of the Mozambican War of Independence (1964–1975).
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Original: Azevedo, Mario (1991) "Frente de Libertação de Moçambique" Historical Dictionary of Mozambique Scarecrow Press, Metuchen, New Jersey, page 65, ISBN 0-8108-2413-2 Mueda was  the site of Portuguese operations against FRELIMO.
Revised: Azevedo, Mario (1991) "Frente de Libertação de Moçambique" Historical Dictionary of Mozambique Scarecrow Press, Metuchen, New Jersey, page 65, ISBN 0-8108-2413-2 Mueda was also the site of Portuguese operations against FRELIMO.
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Original: Mazrui, Ali Al'Amin and Tidy, Michael (1984) Nationalism and new states in Africa from about 1935 to the present Heinemann, Nairobi, page 141, ISBN 0-435-94145-3 In May 1970, General Arriaga began Operation Gordian Knot, headquartered out of Mueda , where by the end of the operation, he claimed to have eliminated over seventy FRELIMO bases.
Revised: Mazrui, Ali Al'Amin and Tidy, Michael (1984) Nationalism and new states in Africa from about 1935 to the present Heinemann, Nairobi, page 141, ISBN 0-435-94145-3 In May 1970, General Arriaga began Operation Gordian Knot, headquartered out of Mueda . By the end of the operation, he claimed to have eliminated over seventy FRELIMO bases.
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Original:  Fitzpatrick, Mary (2007) Mozambique Lonely Planet, Footscray, Victoria, Australia, page 162, Geography Mueda is located on the upland Mueda Plateau, which has a more temperate climate than the coast, but where, because of the permeable sandy soil, water infiltrates to a great depth, making it difficult to supply drinking water.
Revised:  Geography Mueda is located on the upland Mueda Plateau, which has a more temperate climate than the coast, but where, because of the permeable sandy soil, water infiltrates to a great depth, making it difficult to supply drinking water.
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Original:  West, Harry G. (2001) Sorcery of Construction and Socialist Modernization: Ways of Understanding Power in Postcolonial Mozambique American Ethnologist 28(1): pp. 119-150, page 123 In about 1970, Portugal, the ruling authority of Mozambique at the time, built a system to supply drinkable water, under the direction of the engineer Canhoto.
Revised:  In about 1970, Portugal, the ruling authority of Mozambique at the time, built a system to supply drinkable water, under the direction of the engineer Canhoto.
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Original:  Cairncross, S. and Cliff, J. (1987) "Water use and health in Mueda, Mozambique" Transactions of the Royal Society of Tropical Medicine and Hygiene 81: pp. 51-54 Massacre of Mueda On 16 June 1960, Makonde nationalists organized a demonstration in front of the Mueda District headquarters on the Mueda town square in order to demand independence from Portugal.
Revised:  Massacre of Mueda On 16 June 1960, Makonde nationalists organized a demonstration in front of the Mueda District headquarters on the Mueda town square in order to demand independence from Portugal.
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Original:  Ethnographies of suspicion in the new world order Duke University Press, Durham, North Carolina, page 103, The Portuguese administrator ordered his pre-assembled troops to fire on the crowd, Newitt, Malyn D. D. (1995) A History of Mozambique Indiana University Press, Bloomington, Indiana, page 521, after which many more were thrown to their death into a ravine.
Revised:  Ethnographies of suspicion in the new world order Duke University Press, Durham, North Carolina, page 103, The Portuguese administrator ordered his pre-assembled troops to fire on the crowd, after which many more were thrown to their death into a ravine.
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Original:  Azevedo, Mario (1991) "Frente de Libertação de Moçambique" Historical Dictionary of Mozambique Scarecrow Press, Metuchen, New Jersey, page 65, Mueda was also the site of Portuguese operations against FRELIMO.
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Original:  In 1967, in one of its first major military actions, FRELIMO launched an abortive attack against the airbase there, Newitt, Malyn D. D. (1995) A History of Mozambique Indiana University Press, Bloomington, Indiana, page 525, although the base was seriously damaged.
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Original:  Mazrui, Ali Al'Amin and Tidy, Michael (1984) Nationalism and new states in Africa from about 1935 to the present Heinemann, Nairobi, page 141, In May 1970, General Arriaga began Operation Gordian Knot, headquartered out of Mueda.
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Original:  Newitt, Malyn D. D. (1995) A History of Mozambique Indiana University Press, Bloomington, Indiana, page 531, However, other than loss of equipment and supplies, the operation did not affect FRELIMO's ability to infiltrate additional arms from Tanzania, and did not substantially affect their ability to wage war.
Revised:  However, other than loss of equipment and supplies, the operation did not affect FRELIMO's ability to infiltrate additional arms from Tanzania, and did not substantially affect their ability to wage war.
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Original:  Schneidman, Witney Wright (2003) Engaging Africa: Washington and the fall of Portugal's colonial empire University Press of America, Lanham, Maryland, page 126, In a later attack, in 1972, against the Mueda airbase, all nineteen airplanes were destroyed.
Revised:  In a later attack, in 1972, against the Mueda airbase, all nineteen airplanes were destroyed.
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Original:  Mazrui, Ali Al'Amin and Tidy, Michael (1984) Nationalism and new states in Africa from about 1935 to the present Heinemann, Nairobi, page 143,
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Original: Siyaj K'ak' (alternative spelling: Siyah K'ak' ), also known as Fire is Born (formerly nicknamed "Smoking Frog"), was a prominent political figure mentioned in the glyphs of Classic Period (250-800 C.E.) Maya civilization monuments, principally Tikal (which he conquered on January 16, 378), as well as Uaxactun and the city of Copan.
Revised: Siyaj K'ak' (alternative spelling: Siyah Kʼakʼ ), also known as Fire is Born (formerly nicknamed "Smoking Frog"), was a prominent political figure mentioned in the glyphs of Classic Period (250-800 C.E.) Maya civilization monuments, principally Tikal (which he conquered on January 16, 378), as well as Uaxactun and the city of Copan.
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Original:  Epigraphers originally identified him by the nickname "Smoking Frog", a description of his name glyph, but later deciphered it as Siyaj K'ak' meaning "Fire is born . "  He is believed to have been the general of the Teotihuacano ruler Spearthrower Owl.
Revised:  Epigraphers originally identified him by the nickname "Smoking Frog", a description of his name glyph, but later deciphered it as Siyaj K'ak' meaning "Fire is born " He is believed to have been the general of the Teotihuacano ruler Spearthrower Owl.
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Original:  Epigraphers originally identified him by the nickname "Smoking Frog", a description of his name glyph, but later deciphered it as Siyaj K'ak' meaning "Fire is born . "  He is believed to have been the general of the Teotihuacano ruler Spearthrower Owl.
Revised:  Epigraphers originally identified him by the nickname "Smoking Frog", a description of his name glyph, but later deciphered it as Siyaj K'ak' meaning "Fire is born . " . He is believed to have been the general of the Teotihuacano ruler Spearthrower Owl.
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Original:  Overview Originally from Teotihuacan or very closely allied with that city, Siyaj K'ak' was a warlord in the Maya heartland of the Petén (modern Guatemala) during the fourth century.
Revised:  Overview Originally from Teotihuacan or very closely allied with that city, Siyaj Kʼakʼ was a warlord in the Maya heartland of the Petén (modern Guatemala) during the fourth century.
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Original:  Siyaj K'ak' remained a power in the region until his death early in the fifth century, acting as overlord to such kings as Yax Nuun Ayiin I (aka "Curl Nose") of Tikal.
Revised:  Siyaj Kʼakʼ remained a power in the region until his death early in the fifth century, acting as overlord to such kings as Yax Nuun Ayiin I (aka "Curl Nose") of Tikal.
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Original:  The appearance of Siyah K'ak' marks the beginning of a strong cultural influx from the Valley of Mexico, although whether this was accomplished via peaceful interaction or military invasion is still being very actively debated.
Revised:  The appearance of Siyah Kʼakʼ marks the beginning of a strong cultural influx from the Valley of Mexico, although whether this was accomplished via peaceful interaction or military invasion is still being very actively debated.
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Original:  See also Bejucal (Mesoamerican site) El Zotz El _Perú_(Maya _site )#Stela _15 Tikal#Stela _31 Uaxactun#Conquest _of_Uaxactun_by_Siyaj_K .27ak.27 External links The name glyph of Siyah K'ak' "The arrival of strangers" Teotihuacan in classic maya history Naachtun ’ s Stela 24 and the Entrada of 378 (Maya Decipherment, David Stuart, 2014)
Revised:  See also Bejucal (Mesoamerican site) El Zotz El Perú (Maya site )#Stela _15 Tikal#Stela _31 Uaxactun#Conquest _of_Uaxactun_by_Siyaj_K .27ak.27 External links The name glyph of Siyah K'ak' "The arrival of strangers" Teotihuacan in classic maya history Naachtun ’ s Stela 24 and the Entrada of 378 (Maya Decipherment, David Stuart, 2014)
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Original:  See also Bejucal (Mesoamerican site) El Zotz El _Perú_(Maya _site )#Stela _15 Tikal#Stela _31 Uaxactun#Conquest _of_Uaxactun_by_Siyaj_K .27ak.27 External links The name glyph of Siyah K'ak' "The arrival of strangers" Teotihuacan in classic maya history Naachtun ’ s Stela 24 and the Entrada of 378 (Maya Decipherment, David Stuart, 2014)
Revised:  See also Bejucal (Mesoamerican site) El Zotz El _Perú_(Maya _site )#Stela 15 Tikal#Stela _31 Uaxactun#Conquest _of_Uaxactun_by_Siyaj_K .27ak.27 External links The name glyph of Siyah K'ak' "The arrival of strangers" Teotihuacan in classic maya history Naachtun ’ s Stela 24 and the Entrada of 378 (Maya Decipherment, David Stuart, 2014)
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Original:  See also Bejucal (Mesoamerican site) El Zotz El _Perú_(Maya _site )#Stela _15 Tikal#Stela _31 Uaxactun#Conquest _of_Uaxactun_by_Siyaj_K .27ak.27 External links The name glyph of Siyah K'ak' "The arrival of strangers" Teotihuacan in classic maya history Naachtun ’ s Stela 24 and the Entrada of 378 (Maya Decipherment, David Stuart, 2014)
Revised:  See also Bejucal (Mesoamerican site) El Zotz El _Perú_(Maya _site )#Stela _15 Tikal#Stela 31 Uaxactun#Conquest _of_Uaxactun_by_Siyaj_K .27ak.27 External links The name glyph of Siyah K'ak' "The arrival of strangers" Teotihuacan in classic maya history Naachtun ’ s Stela 24 and the Entrada of 378 (Maya Decipherment, David Stuart, 2014)
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