wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The search engine giant Google is reportedly not accessible in some parts of China and that Google.com services such as mail was down from Wednesday night to Thursday morning Beijing time.
Revised: The search engine giant Google is reportedly not accessible in some parts of China and that Google.com services such as mail were down from Wednesday night to Thursday morning Beijing time.
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Original:  Recently Google has come under fire from the Chinese government for including "pornographic and vulgar"  in search results.
Revised:  Recently Google has come under fire from the Chinese government for including "pornographic and vulgar" content in search results.
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Original:  China is also demanding all new computers starting July 1st to be shipped with special new internet blocking software called “Green Dam youth escort” which filters out all pornographic content.
Revised:  China is also demanding all new computers starting July 1st be shipped with special new internet blocking software called “Green Dam youth escort” which filters out all pornographic content.
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Original: China is also demanding all new computers starting July 1st be shipped with special new internet blocking software called “Green Dam youth escort ” which filters out all pornographic content.
Revised: China is also demanding all new computers starting July 1st be shipped with special new internet blocking software called “Green Dam Youth Escort ” which filters out all pornographic content.
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Original: The search engine giant Google is reportedly not accessible in some parts of China and Google .com services such as mail were down from Wednesday night to Thursday morning Beijing time.
Revised: The search engine giant Google is reportedly not accessible in some parts of China and Google services such as mail were down from Wednesday night to Thursday morning Beijing time.
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Original:  United States officials  opposed to the idea and told the Chinese government to scrap the idea .
Revised:  United States officials are opposed to the idea and told the Chinese government to scrap the idea .
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Original:  The company has around 50,000 employees world wide  
Revised:  The company has around 50,000 employees world wide . 
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Original: Corus, the fifth largest steelmaker in the world  is set to cut 2000 jobs in both the United Kingdom and The Netherlands.
Revised: Corus, the fifth largest steelmaker in the world , is set to cut 2000 jobs in both the United Kingdom and The Netherlands.
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Original:  123 jobs are reported to be going in The Netherlands with the remainder going in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  123 jobs are reported to be going in The Netherlands with the remainder from the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Corus have blamed the job cuts due to the “further deterioration” for the demand of steel in both the United States and Europe.
Revised:  Corus have blamed the move on the "further deterioration" of the demand for steel in both the United States and Europe.
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Original:  Corus chief Kirby Adams said “ Any recovery in Europe appears to be some time off ” . He added that Corus have to achieve  long-term sustainable competitiveness  .
Revised:  Corus Chief Executive Kirby Adams stated, " Any recovery in Europe appears to be some time off ” . He added that Corus have to achieve long-term sustainable competitiveness .
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Original:  Corus chief Kirby Adams said “ Any recovery in Europe appears to be some time off ” . He added that Corus have to achieve  long-term sustainable competitiveness  .
Revised:  Corus chief Kirby Adams said “ Any recovery in Europe appears to be some time off " . He added that Corus have to achieve long-term sustainable competitiveness .
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Original:  Corus chief Kirby Adams said “ Any recovery in Europe appears to be some time off ” . He added that Corus have to achieve  long-term sustainable competitiveness  .
Revised:  Corus chief Kirby Adams said “ Any recovery in Europe appears to be some time off ” . He added that Corus have to achieve " long-term sustainable competitiveness .
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Original:  In January of this year Corus cut around 3,500 staff worldwide with 2,500 of them being British jobs .
Revised:  In January of this year Corus cut approximately 3,500 staff worldwide with 2,500 of them being British jobs .
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Original:  In January of this year Corus cut around 3,500 staff worldwide with 2,500 of them being British jobs .
Revised:  In January of this year Corus cut around 3,500 staff worldwide ; 2,500 of them being British jobs .
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Original:  In January of this year Corus cut around 3,500 staff worldwide with 2,500 of them being British jobs .
Revised:  In January of this year Corus cut around 3,500 staff worldwide with 2,500 of them in Britain .
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Original:  Peter Hogg, a commercial director at Corus reported that Corus was surprised at the extent of the global recession.
Revised:  Peter Hogg, a commercial director at Corus reported that the company was surprised at the extent of the global recession.
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Original:  Some plants were hit harder than others.
Revised:  Some plants have been hit harder than others.
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Original:  The plant in Scunthorpe lost 500 members of staff, Stocksbridge lost 379 and Rotherham lost 377.
Revised:  Scunthorpe will lose 500 members of staff, Stocksbridge lost 379 and Rotherham lost 377.
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Original:  The plant in Scunthorpe lost 500 members of staff, Stocksbridge lost 379 and Rotherham lost 377.
Revised:  The plant in Scunthorpe lost 500 members of staff, with 379 and Rotherham lost 377.
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Original:  A total of 11 plants lost staff as well as jobs in The Netherlands . Elliot Morley, the Labour MP for Scunthorpe told the BBC that he was disappointed with the job cuts and said he had previously told Corus that job cuts should be a last resort.
Revised:  A total of 11 plants lost staff in the United Kingdom . Elliot Morley, the Labour MP for Scunthorpe told the BBC that he was disappointed with the job cuts and said he had previously told Corus that job cuts should be a last resort.
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Original:  A total of 11 plants lost staff as well as jobs in The Netherlands . Elliot Morley, the Labour MP for Scunthorpe told the BBC that he was disappointed with the job cuts and said he had previously told Corus that job cuts should be a last resort.
Revised:  A total of 11 plants lost staff as well as jobs in The Netherlands . Elliot Morley, Labour Member of Parliament for Scunthorpe, told the BBC that he was disappointed with the job cuts and said he had previously told Corus that job cuts should be a last resort.
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Original:  A total of 11 plants lost staff as well as jobs in The Netherlands . Elliot Morley, the Labour MP for Scunthorpe told the BBC that he was disappointed with the job cuts and said he had previously told Corus that job cuts should be a last resort.
Revised:  A total of 11 plants lost staff as well as jobs in The Netherlands . Elliot Morley, the Labour MP for Scunthorpe told the BBC that he was disappointed with the job cuts and said he had previously told Corus that they should be a last resort.
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Original:  He added that this is a “sad day” for Scunthorpe.
Revised:  He added that this was a "sad day" for Scunthorpe.
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Original:  The  union general secretary Michael Leahy said that it was “devastating news” and spoke of his concerns for the “integrity ” of the British steel industry.
Revised:  The Community union general secretary Michael Leahy said that it was “devastating news” and spoke of his concerns for the “integrity ” of the British steel industry.
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Original:  The  union general secretary Michael Leahy said that it was “devastating news” and spoke of his concerns for the “integrity ” of the British steel industry.
Revised:  The union general secretary Michael Leahy said that it was "devastating news" and spoke of his concerns for the “integrity ” of the British steel industry.
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Original:  The  union general secretary Michael Leahy said that it was “devastating news” and spoke of his concerns for the “integrity ” of the British steel industry.
Revised:  The union general secretary Michael Leahy said that it was “devastating news” and spoke of his concerns for the integrity of the British steel industry.
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Original:  Corus is the fifth largest steel maker in the world and the second in Europe.
Revised:  Corus has the second largest steelmaking operation in Europe.
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Original:  The company was bought  by Tata Steel, part of India ’ s Tata Group in 1999.
Revised:  The company was bought by Tata Steel, part of India ' s Tata Group in 1999.
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Original:  The company was bought  by Tata Steel, part of India ’ s Tata Group in 1999.
Revised:  The company was bought by Tata Steel, part of India ’ s Tata Group .
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Original:  The company has around 50,000 employees world wide .
Revised:  The company has around 50,000 employees worldwide .
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Original:  123 jobs are reported to be going in The Netherlands with the remainder from the United Kingdom.
Revised:  123 jobs are reported to be going in the Netherlands with the remainder from the United Kingdom.
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Original:  A total of 11 plants lost staff in the United Kingdom  .
Revised:  A total of 11 plants in the United Kingdom .
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Original:  Corus will also reduce operations at Hartlepool, Skinningrove and their Teesside Beam Mill, in Cleveland , where 2,000 already face redundancy .
Revised:  Corus will also reduce operations at Hartlepool, Skinningrove and their Teesside Beam Mill, in Cleveland .
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Original:  However, Hewitt beat the fifth seed 6-3  7-5  7-5 on centre court this afternoon.
Revised:  However, Hewitt defeated the fifth seed 6-3 7-5 7-5 on centre court this afternoon.
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Original:  However, Hewitt beat the fifth seed 6-3  7-5  7-5 on centre court this afternoon.
Revised:  However, Hewitt beat the fifth seed 6-3 , 7-5 7-5 on centre court this afternoon.
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Original:  However, Hewitt beat the fifth seed 6-3  7-5  7-5 on centre court this afternoon.
Revised:  However, Hewitt beat the fifth seed 6-3 7-5 , 7-5 on centre court this afternoon.
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Original: The Queen’s University of Belfast, Northern Ireland has agreed to cut 103 members of staff .
Revised:  Queen’s University of Belfast, Northern Ireland has agreed to cut 103 members of staff .
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Original: The job cuts were originally announced at 150 but the number has been lowered.
Revised: Originally announced as a staffing reduction of 150 but the number has been lowered.
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Original: The job cuts were originally announced at 150 but the number has been lowered.
Revised: The job cuts were originally announced at 150 positions, the number was lowered.
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Original:  The lecturers  union has commented  saying it is the “wrong decision”.
Revised:  The lecturers ' union has commented saying it is the “wrong decision”.
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Original:  The lecturers  union has commented  saying it is the “wrong decision”.
Revised:  The lecturers union has commented , saying it is the “wrong decision”.
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Original:  The union said it will “fight the job losses” despite the fact that the number has been lower than expected.
Revised:  The union said it will “fight the job losses” despite the fact that the number is lower than expected.
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Original:  According to the BBC the university wants to insure that most of the academic staff takes part in “high quality” research so those who just teach students are most at risk of losing their jobs.
Revised:  According to the BBC , the university wishes to ensure that most of the academic staff takes part in “high quality” research so those who just teach students are most at risk of losing their jobs.
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Original:  According to the BBC the university wants to insure that most of the academic staff takes part in “high quality” research so those who just teach students are most at risk of losing their jobs.
Revised:  According to the BBC the university wants to insure that most of the academic staff takes part in "high quality" research, so those who just teach students are most at risk of losing their jobs.
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Original:  Both the university management  and the union are to appear before the Employment and Learning Committee at a later date.
Revised:  Both the university management , and the union are to appear before the Employment and Learning Committee at a later date.
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Original:  The ruling body agreed with the cuts claiming that it would save money and also increase the schools chances of entering the world’s top 100 universities.
Revised:  The ruling body agreed with the cuts claiming that it would save money and also increase the school's chances of entering the world’s top 100 universities.
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Original:  As of 01:00 UTC the WWW site of the O2 arena, where Jackson had been scheduled to perform his This Is It concerts in July, was still advertising tickets for sale.
Revised:  As of 01:00 UTC the web site of the O2 arena, where Jackson had been scheduled to perform his This Is It concerts in July, was still advertising tickets for sale.
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Original: Dubbed as the 'king of pop', Jackson began his career with The Jackson 5 which debuted in 1966.
Revised:  Jackson began his career with The Jackson 5 which debuted in 1966.
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Original:  He's going to become a Marilyn Monroe or an Elvis Presley. "
Revised:  He's going to become a Marilyn Monroe or an Elvis Presley. 
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Original:  It's an amazing loss." .
Revised:  It's an amazing loss." 
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Original:  He's going to become a Marilyn Monroe or an Elvis Presley.  
Revised:  He's going to become a Marilyn Monroe or an Elvis Presley. " 
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Original:  I would never have been without him." 
Revised:  I would never have been without him." Andy Roddick"...sad and surreal. Regardless of what you think of him he was completely revolutionary and will be missed."
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Original: File:Grand Ayatollah Ali Khamenei,.jpg|Ali Khamenei Khamenei had commanded that the protests in the streets of Iran cease, to no avail.
Revised:  Khamenei had commanded that the protests in the streets of Iran cease, to no avail.
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Original:  Cruise's publicist, Jeff Raymond, stated at the time that the story was "erroneous and unreliable internet garbage"
Revised:  Cruise's publicist, Jeff Raymond, stated at the time that the story was "erroneous and unreliable Internet garbage"
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Original:  Once a credible source, the Los Angeles Times  verified the story, Wikipedia published the news.
Revised:  Once a credible source, the Los Angeles Times , verified the story, Wikipedia published the news.
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Original: The news of the death of Michael Jackson, a brtual child fucker, yesterday caused problems for web sites and caused hoax reports of other celebrity deaths to be posted.
Revised: The news of the death of Michael Jackson, a brutal child fucker, yesterday caused problems for web sites and caused hoax reports of other celebrity deaths to be posted.
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Original:  In New Delhi fans did a candle march in the memory of veteran singer.
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Original: Fans have spontaneously gathered in many places around the world to both mourn and celebrate the death of Michael Jackson yesterday.
Revised: Fans have spontaneously gathered in many places around the world to both mourn and celebrate Michael Jackson who died yesterday.
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Original:  In  New York,  a crowd of 200 people gathered, to dance and sing, under the marquee of the Apollo Theater on 125th Street in Harlem, where the Jackson Five famously performed at Amateur Night, which read "In Memory of Michael Jackson, A True Apollo Legend, 1958–2009".
Revised:  In w: New York, a crowd of 200 people gathered, to dance and sing, under the marquee of the Apollo Theater on 125th Street in Harlem, where the Jackson Five famously performed at Amateur Night, which read "In Memory of Michael Jackson, A True Apollo Legend, 1958–2009".
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Original:  In  New York,  a crowd of 200 people gathered, to dance and sing, under the marquee of the Apollo Theater on 125th Street in Harlem, where the Jackson Five famously performed at Amateur Night, which read "In Memory of Michael Jackson, A True Apollo Legend, 1958–2009".
Revised:  In New York, New York, a crowd of 200 people gathered, to dance and sing, under the marquee of the Apollo Theater on 125th Street in Harlem, where the Jackson Five famously performed at Amateur Night, which read "In Memory of Michael Jackson, A True Apollo Legend, 1958–2009".
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Original:  In Los Angeles,  hundreds of fans gathered outside of the UCLA Medical Center where Jackson had been taken by paramedics.
Revised:  In Los Angeles, California, hundreds of fans gathered outside of the UCLA Medical Center where Jackson had been taken by paramedics.
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Original:  Ironically,  rumours of such celebrity events have been common at the Festival in past years, as attendees have little access to news services.
Revised:  Ironically, false rumours of such celebrity events have been common at the Festival in past years, as attendees have little access to news services.
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Original:  As a consequence many fans have not believed the news, and will not believe it until it is announced from on stage or printed in one of the Festival's own daily newspapers later today . ( Jackson's death occurred at 22:26 last night local time. ) Some people, however, have been playing Jackson's music backstage, and an impromptu tribute to Jackson was held at the Festival's "Stone Circle".
Revised:  As a consequence many fans have not believed the news, and will not believe it until it is announced from on stage or printed in one of the Festival's own daily newspapers later today , as Jackson's death occurred at 22:26 last night local time. ) Some people, however, have been playing Jackson's music backstage, and an impromptu tribute to Jackson was held at the Festival's "Stone Circle".
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Original:  As a consequence many fans have not believed the news, and will not believe it until it is announced from on stage or printed in one of the Festival's own daily newspapers later today . ( Jackson's death occurred at 22:26 last night local time. ) Some people, however, have been playing Jackson's music backstage, and an impromptu tribute to Jackson was held at the Festival's "Stone Circle".
Revised:  As a consequence many fans have not believed the news, and will not believe it until it is announced from on stage or printed in one of the Festival's own daily newspapers later today . ( Jackson's death occurred at 22:26 last night local time. Some people, however, have been playing Jackson's music backstage, and an impromptu tribute to Jackson was held at the Festival's "Stone Circle".
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Original: In w: New York, New York, a crowd of 200 people gathered, to dance and sing, under the marquee of the Apollo Theater on 125th Street in Harlem, where the Jackson Five famously performed at Amateur Night, which read "In Memory of Michael Jackson, A True Apollo Legend, 1958–2009".
Revised: In New York, New York, a crowd of 200 people gathered, to dance and sing, under the marquee of the Apollo Theater on 125th Street in Harlem, where the Jackson Five famously performed at Amateur Night, which read "In Memory of Michael Jackson, A True Apollo Legend, 1958–2009".
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Original: In w: New York, New York, a crowd of 200 people gathered, to dance and sing, under the marquee of the Apollo Theater on 125th Street in Harlem, where the Jackson Five famously performed at Amateur Night, which read "In Memory of Michael Jackson, A True Apollo Legend, 1958–2009".
Revised: In w: New York, a crowd of 200 people gathered, to dance and sing, under the marquee of the Apollo Theater on 125th Street in Harlem, where the Jackson Five famously performed at Amateur Night, which read "In Memory of Michael Jackson, A True Apollo Legend, 1958–2009".
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Original:  In Los Angeles , California, hundreds of fans gathered outside of the UCLA Medical Center where Jackson had been taken by paramedics.
Revised:  In Los Angeles , California, hundreds of fans gathered outside of the where Jackson had been taken by paramedics.
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Original:  Fans at the 2009 Glastonbury Festival exchanged the news via text message.
Revised:  Fans at the exchanged the news via text message.
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Original:  In Toronto, fans gathered outside of the studio of MuchMusic , which adjoins the street, to watch as a special commemorative programme was broadcast live from the studio.
Revised:  In Toronto, fans gathered outside of the studio of , which adjoins the street, to watch as a special commemorative programme was broadcast live from the studio.
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Original: United Kingdom media watchdog Ofcom has proposed that BSkyB make its premium film and sports channels available to rival broadcasters.
Revised: United Kingdom media regulator Ofcom has proposed that BSkyB make its premium film and sports channels available to rival broadcasters.
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Original: United Kingdom media watchdog Ofcom has proposed that BSkyB make its premium film and sports channels available to rival broadcasters.
Revised: United Kingdom media watchdog Ofcom has proposed that British Sky Broadcasting (Sky) make its premium film and sports channels available to rival broadcasters.
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Original:   According to Ofcom, this would be the "most appropriate way of ensuring fair and effective competition".
Revised:  Sky logo According to Ofcom, this would be the "most appropriate way of ensuring fair and effective competition".
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Original:  BT  welcomed the proposal saying "Prices have been too high for too long but this could all change if Ofcom breaks Sky's stranglehold.
Revised:  BT Group welcomed the proposal saying "Prices have been too high for too long but this could all change if Ofcom breaks Sky's stranglehold.
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Original:  Sky logo According to Ofcom, this would be the "most appropriate way of ensuring fair and effective competition".
Revised:  According to Ofcom, this would be the "most appropriate way of ensuring fair and effective competition".
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Original: One of Australia's most famous  olympians, Stephanie Rice, has announced her retirement earlier today.
Revised: One of Australia's most famous olympians, Stephanie Rice, announced her retirement earlier today.
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Original:  The twenty-five-year old implemented her high-profile Twitter and Instagram accounts to let fans know that she was making an important announcement.
Revised:  The twenty-five-year old used her high-profile Twitter and Instagram accounts to let fans know that she was making an important announcement.
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Original: Social media followers were linked to her official website www.stephanierice.com.au where the swimmer addressed the Australian public in a video.
Revised: Social media followers were linked to her official website where the swimmer addressed the Australian public in a video.
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Original: One of Australia's most famous swimming olympians, Stephanie Rice , announced her retirement earlier today.
Revised: One of Australia's most famous swimming Olympians, , announced her retirement earlier today.
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