wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: ]] A week-long lockdown is scheduled to begin at midnight in the , , and local government areas in New South Wales (NSW), Australia, after a local resident was infected with COVID-19 by a truck driver at the Nestle Purina pet food factory in , which the driver visited from July 13 to 16.
Revised: ]] A week-long lockdown is scheduled to begin at midnight in the , , and local government areas in New South Wales (NSW), Australia, after a local resident was infected with COVID-19 by a truck driver at the food factory in , which the driver visited from July 13 to 16.
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Original: ]] A week-long lockdown is scheduled to begin at midnight in the , , and local government areas in New South Wales (NSW), Australia, after a local resident was infected with COVID-19 by a truck driver at the food factory in , which the driver visited from July 13 to 16.
Revised: ]] A week-long lockdown began at midnight yesterday in the , , and local government areas in New South Wales (NSW), Australia, after a local resident was infected with COVID-19 by a truck driver at the food factory in , which the driver visited from July 13 to 16.
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Original:  The decision  follows what ABC News described as a "crisis cabinet meeting" of the New South Wales government.
Revised:  The decision to go into lockdown follows what ABC News described as a "crisis cabinet meeting" of the New South Wales government.
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Original:  Shops, schools, and construction will remain open.
Revised:  Shops, schools, and construction are remaining open.
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Original:  Under the new regulations, residents of the three areas will only be permitted to leave their homes for "essential things "  . Shops, schools, and construction are remaining open.
Revised:  Under the new regulations, residents of the three areas will only be permitted to leave their homes for "essential " . Shops, schools, and construction are remaining open.
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Original:  Five sites in have been listed as exposure venues, and people who visited one or more are advised by to get tested for the coronavirus and  self-isolate for two weeks.
Revised:  Five sites in have been listed as exposure venues, and people who visited one or more are advised by to get tested for the coronavirus and to self-isolate for two weeks.
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Original:  More than 414,000 COVID-19 deaths have been officially recorded in India, the third-highest total in the world.
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Original:  He also added that the figures only went up to May and didn't include all of June or any of July, meaning the truth death toll may still be undercounted  
Revised:  He also added that the figures only went up to May and didn't include all of June or any of July, meaning the truth death toll may still be undercounted . 
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Original: In a paper published July 20 , the US-based Center for Global Development said that excess deaths in India during the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 and as many as 5 million between May 2020 and June 21  2021.
Revised: In a paper published July 20 , the US-based Center for Global Development wrote that excess deaths in India during the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 and as many as 5 million between May 2020 and June 21 2021.
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Original: In a paper published July 20 , the US-based Center for Global Development said that excess deaths in India during the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 and as many as 5 million between May 2020 and June 21  2021.
Revised: In a paper published July 20 , the US-based Center for Global Development said that excess deaths in India during the COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 and as many as 5 million between May 2020 and June 21 2021.
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Original: In a paper published July 20 , the US-based Center for Global Development said that excess deaths in India during the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 and as many as 5 million between May 2020 and June 21  2021.
Revised: In a paper published July 20 , the US-based Center for Global Development said that excess deaths in India during the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 to 5 million between May 2020 and June 21 2021.
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Original: In a paper published July 20 , the US-based Center for Global Development said that excess deaths in India during the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 and as many as 5 million between May 2020 and June 21  2021.
Revised: In a paper published July 20 , the US-based Center for Global Development said that excess deaths in India during the ongoing COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 and as many as 5 million between May 2020 and June 21 , 2021.
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Original:  Co-writer of the report Arvind Subramanian said, “After the first wave, which was more spread out, there was a sense that India had escaped the worst because there was this undercounting of deaths, and that led to a culture of complacency.
Revised:  Arvind Subramanian, a co-writer of the report Arvind Subramanian said, “After the first wave, which was more spread out, there was a sense that India had escaped the worst because there was this undercounting of deaths, and that led to a culture of complacency.
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Original:  Co-writer of the report Arvind Subramanian said, “After the first wave, which was more spread out, there was a sense that India had escaped the worst because there was this undercounting of deaths, and that led to a culture of complacency.
Revised:  Co-writer of the report , said that "after the first wave, which was more spread out, there was a sense that India had escaped the worst because there was this undercounting of deaths, and that led to a culture of complacency.
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Original:  He also added that the figures only went up to May and didn't include all of June or any of July, meaning the truth death toll may still be undercounted.
Revised:  Subramanian also added that the figures only went up to May and didn't include all of June or any of July, meaning the truth death toll may still be undercounted.
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Original:  He also added that the figures only went up to May and didn't include all of June or any of July, meaning the truth death toll may still be undercounted.
Revised:  He also added that the figures only went up to May and didn't include all of June or any of July, meaning the true death toll may still be undercounted.
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Original:  Not all of these deaths were necessarily caused by COVID-19, but excess deaths are used to help calculate the impact of the pandemic.
Revised:  While not all of these deaths were necessarily caused by COVID-19, but excess deaths are used to help calculate the impact of the pandemic.
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Original:  Not all of these deaths were necessarily caused by COVID-19, but excess deaths are used to help calculate the impact of the pandemic.
Revised:  Not all of these deaths were necessarily caused by COVID-19, excess deaths can be used to help calculate the impact of the pandemic.
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Original:  In a paper published yesterday, the US-based Center for Global Development wrote that excess deaths in India during the COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 to 5 million between May 2020 and June 21, 2021.
Revised:  In a paper published yesterday, the US-based wrote that excess deaths in India during the COVID-19 pandemic are believed to number between 3.4 to 5 million between May 2020 and June 21, 2021.
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Original:  Arvind Subramanian , a co-writer of the report, said that "after the first wave, which was more spread out, there was a sense that India had escaped the worst because there was this undercounting of deaths, and that led to a culture of complacency.
Revised:  , a co-writer of the report, said that "after the first wave, which was more spread out, there was a sense that India had escaped the worst because there was this undercounting of deaths, and that led to a culture of complacency.
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Original:  ” Subramanian also added that the figures only went up to May and didn't include all of June or any of July, meaning the true death toll may still be undercounted.
Revised:  " Subramanian also added that the figures only went up to May and didn't include all of June or any of July, meaning the true death toll may still be undercounted.
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Original: Flooding in Zhengzhou Floods in province in central China was left at least 25 people dead, and about 200,000 people have been evacuated as of Wednesday, with soldiers leading rescue efforts.
Revised: Flooding in Zhengzhou Floods in province in central China have left at least 25 people dead, and about 200,000 people have been evacuated as of Wednesday, with soldiers leading rescue efforts.
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Original:  9 thousand hectares of crops were  damaged, causing US$11.3 million worth of damage.
Revised:  9 thousand hectares of crops were also damaged, causing US$11.3 million worth of damage.
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Original:  Henan province has been attacked by storms and torrential downpour since July 17.
Revised:  There have been storms and torrential downpour since July 17.
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Original:  According to the National Meteorological Center, 622.7 millimeters of rain fell in 24 hours, far surpassing the 24-hour threshold of 250 millimeters for extremely heavy rainfall.
Revised:  According to the National Meteorological Center, of rain fell in 24 hours, far surpassing the 24-hour threshold of 250 millimeters for extremely heavy rainfall.
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Original:  According to the National Meteorological Center, 622.7 millimeters of rain fell in 24 hours, far surpassing the 24-hour threshold of 250 millimeters for extremely heavy rainfall.
Revised:  According to the National Meteorological Center, 622.7 millimeters of rain fell in 24 hours, far surpassing the 24-hour threshold of for extremely heavy rainfall.
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Original:  From Saturday to Tuesday, 617.1 mm of rain fell in Zhengzhou, almost the equivalent of its annual average of 640.8 mm . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain will remain until Wednesday night.
Revised:  From Saturday to Tuesday, of rain fell in Zhengzhou, almost the equivalent of its annual average of 640.8 mm . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain will remain until Wednesday night.
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Original:  From Saturday to Tuesday, 617.1 mm of rain fell in Zhengzhou, almost the equivalent of its annual average of 640.8 mm . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain will remain until Wednesday night.
Revised:  From Saturday to Tuesday, 617.1 mm of rain fell in Zhengzhou, almost the equivalent of its annual average of . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain will remain until Wednesday night.
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Original:  From Saturday to Tuesday, 617.1 mm of rain fell in Zhengzhou, almost the equivalent of its annual average of 640.8 mm . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain will remain until Wednesday night.
Revised:  From Saturday to Tuesday, 617.1 mm of rain fell in Zhengzhou, almost the equivalent of its annual average of 640.8 mm . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain will continue until Wednesday night.
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Original:  Secondly, the and cause water vapor to converge and go up, causing large amounts of precipitation .
Revised:  Secondly, the and cause water vapor to converge and go up, causing large amounts of .
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Original:  From July 22 to 26 there will be dispersed thunderstorms, but no large amounts of precipitation  
Revised:  From July 22 to 26 there will be dispersed thunderstorms, but no large amounts of precipitation . 
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Original:  The flood has caused landslides and the provincial capital , 's , and roads were inundated with floods.
Revised:  The flooding caused landslides and the provincial capital , 's , and roads were inundated with floods.
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Original:  The flood has caused landslides and the provincial capital , 's , and roads were inundated with floods.
Revised:  The flood has caused landslides and the provincial capital 's and roads were inundated with floods.
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Original: Passengers of  Zhengzhou Metro posted videos of water up to their neck while clinging to handrails.
Revised: Passengers of the Zhengzhou Metro posted videos of water up to their neck while clinging to handrails.
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Original:  At least 12 people were killed in the metro, with five more being injured, and more than five hundred were rescued.
Revised:  At least twelve people were killed in the metro, with five more being injured, and more than five hundred were rescued.
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Original:  9 thousand hectares of crops were also damaged, causing US$11.3 million worth of damage.
Revised:  Nine thousand of crops were also damaged, causing US$11.3 million worth of damage.
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Original:  According to the National Meteorological Center , 622.7 mm  of rain fell in 24 hours, far surpassing the 24-hour threshold of 250 mm for extremely heavy rainfall.
Revised:  According to the , 622.7 mm of rain fell in 24 hours, far surpassing the 24-hour threshold of 250 mm for extremely heavy rainfall.
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Original:  First of all , is approaching province in southeast China, causing large amounts of water vapor to be pushed inland.
Revised:  First , is approaching province in southeast China, causing large amounts of water vapor to be pushed inland.
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Original:  Secondly , the and cause water vapor to converge and go up, causing large amounts of . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain will continue until Wednesday night.
Revised:  Second , the and cause water vapor to converge and go up, causing large amounts of . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain will continue until Wednesday night.
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Original:  Secondly , the and cause water vapor to converge and go up, causing large amounts of . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain will continue until Wednesday night.
Revised:  Secondly , the and cause water vapor to converge and go up, causing large amounts of . According to Zhang Ning, chief weather broadcaster of the Henan Meteorological Service, the torrential rain would continue until Wednesday night.
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Original:  From July 22 to  26 there will be dispersed thunderstorms, but no large amounts of precipitation.
Revised:  From July 22 to July 26 there will be dispersed thunderstorms, but no large amounts of precipitation.
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Original:  From July 22 to  26 there will be dispersed thunderstorms, but no large amounts of precipitation.
Revised:  From July 22 to 26 there are forecasted dispersed thunderstorms, but no large amounts of precipitation.
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Original:  He has hosted talkback radio with ABC Radio since 1989.
Revised:  He has hosted talkback radio with since 1989.
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Original:  Wikinews spoke to Kidd via email about the COVID-19 lockdown in Orange, as well as the upcoming local government elections in New South Wales and his motivations for entering local government.
Revised:  Wikinews reached out to Kidd via email about the COVID-19 lockdown in Orange, as well as the upcoming local government elections in New South Wales and his motivations for entering local government.
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Original:  She wrote a note in ydney Morning Herald, arguing for a case against the so-called "lockdowns" - measures which the state governments in Australia were implementing to stop the spread of COVID-19.
Revised:  She wrote a note in Sydney Morning Herald, arguing for a case against the so-called "lockdowns" - measures which the state governments in Australia were implementing to stop the spread of COVID-19.
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Original:  From my reading, vaccinating the healthy young against COVID-19 with the vaccines ewe presently have available is likely to be worse for them, in expectation, than not vaccinating them and risking their exposure to the disease itself.
Revised:  From my reading, vaccinating the healthy young against COVID-19 with the vaccines we presently have available is likely to be worse for them, in expectation, than not vaccinating them and risking their exposure to the disease itself.
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Original:  The reason for the decline in excess deaths in the initial weeks following the imposition of a shelter-in-place order in the island countries is that people stop using their cars as much (so, fewer traffic accidents), they stop having elective surgeries (which in the short run save lives, as some such surgeries do end in death, sadly) .
Revised:  The reason for the decline in excess deaths in the initial weeks following the imposition of a shelter-in-place order in the island countries is that people stop using their cars as much (so, fewer traffic accidents), they stop having elective surgeries (which in the short run saves lives, as some such surgeries do end in death, sadly) .
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Original:  The reason for the decline in excess deaths in the initial weeks following the imposition of a shelter-in-place order in the island countries is that people stop using their cars as much (so, fewer traffic accidents), they stop having elective surgeries (which in the short run save lives, as some such surgeries do end in death, sadly) .
Revised:  The reason for the decline in excess deaths in the initial weeks following the imposition of a shelter-in-place order in the island countries is that people stop using their cars as much (so, fewer traffic accidents), they stop having elective surgeries (which in the short run save lives, as some such surgeries do end in death, sadly) 
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Original:  And because they don't go to the bars and generally out and about, and accidentally kill each other.
Revised:  , and because they don't go to the bars and generally out and about, and accidentally kill each other.
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Original:  Contact tracing as a general principle seems to me unlikely to pass a cost-benefit test (which BTW is what the blanket lockdown policies should have had to pass, and never did, before being implemented).
Revised:  Contact tracing as a general principle seems to me unlikely to pass a cost-benefit test (which by the way is what the blanket lockdown policies should have had to pass, and never did, before being implemented).
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Original: On July 22, 2021, Wikinews interviewed Professor Gigi Foster of School of Economics at the , Sydney, Australia about measures that the government took to stop the spread of COVID-19, a virus that caused what the World Health Organization declared a pandemic last year.
Revised: On July 22, Wikinews interviewed Professor Gigi Foster of School of Economics at the , Sydney, Australia about measures that the government took to stop the spread of COVID-19, a virus that caused what the World Health Organization declared a pandemic last year.
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Original:  According to the article, around 50 and escapees have  been sent back to their place of origin following their arrest  .
Revised:  According to the article, around 50 and escapees have already been sent back to their place of origin following their arrest .
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Original:  An anonymous source told that "The Dandong customs office was opened just for today and they [Chinese border authorities] sent about 50 North Korean escapees back to North Korea on two buses."
Revised:  An anonymous witness told that "The Dandong customs office was opened just for today and they [Chinese border authorities] sent about 50 North Korean escapees back to North Korea on two buses."
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Original:  The source also added that "dozens of police officers lined up in front of the customs office to block public access and ensure nobody was filming."
Revised:  The witness also added that "dozens of police officers lined up in front of the customs office to block public access and ensure nobody was filming."
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Original:  Both countries have a friendly relationship, with both leaders having exchanged greeting messages on July 11, as reported by state newspaper . A 1986 bilateral border protocol signed by both nations warrants the deportation of any and all defectors and other North Koreans illegaly staying in China.
Revised:  Both countries maintain a friendly relationship, with both leaders having exchanged greeting messages on July 11, as reported by state newspaper . A 1986 bilateral border protocol signed by both nations warrants the deportation of any and all defectors and other North Koreans illegaly staying in China.
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Original:  Both countries have a friendly relationship, with both leaders having exchanged greeting messages on July 11, as reported by state newspaper . A 1986 bilateral border protocol signed by both nations warrants the deportation of any and all defectors and other North Koreans illegaly staying in China.
Revised:  Both countries have a friendly relationship, with both leaders having exchanged greetings on July 11, as reported by state newspaper . A 1986 bilateral border protocol signed by both nations warrants the deportation of any and all defectors and other North Koreans illegaly staying in China.
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Original:  According to data reported by South Korea's , only two defectors from the North reached South Korea between April and June of this year, the lowest number ever recorded since the Ministry started recording their number of defectors.
Revised:  According to data reported by South Korea's , only two defectors from the North reached South Korea between April and June of this year, the lowest number ever recorded since the Ministry started recording the inflow of defectors.
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Original:  In an article published by Human Rights Watch on Thursday, over 1100 North Koreans living in China are under the risk of being sent back to North Korea.
Revised:  In an article published by Human Rights Watch on Thursday, over 1100 North Koreans living in China are described as being risk of being sent back to North Korea.
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Original:  Such a decrease in the amount of defectors is mainly being attributed to the COVID-19 pandemic, as North Korea entirely stopped people from leaving or entering the country,  still claiming to have no cases of the virus.
Revised:  Such a decrease in the amount of defectors is mainly being attributed to the COVID-19 pandemic, as North Korea entirely stopped people from leaving or entering the country, while still claiming to have no cases of the virus.
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Original: The 2020 Summer Olympics opening ceremony today took place in Tokyo's National Stadium  . Japanese tennis player , 23 lit the Olympic flame.
Revised: The 2020 Summer Olympics opening ceremony took place today in Tokyo's National Stadium . Japanese tennis player , 23 lit the Olympic flame.
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Original:  The Olympic cauldron was represented as the sun on top of Japan's Mount Fuji , which then opened like a flower, symbolising "vitality and hope".
Revised:  The Olympic cauldron was represented as the sun on top of Japan's , which then opened like a flower, symbolising "vitality and hope".
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