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Original:  particularly Marco Medici, who remains in a coma at  Alfred Hospital in Melbourne  The accident occured after the victims left a 16th birthday party along an isolated road in Cardwell, southeast of Mildura.
Revised:  particularly Marco Medici, who remains in a coma at the Alfred Hospital in Melbourne The accident occured after the victims left a 16th birthday party along an isolated road in Cardwell, southeast of Mildura.
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Original:  particularly Marco Medici, who remains in a coma at  Alfred Hospital in Melbourne  The accident occured after the victims left a 16th birthday party along an isolated road in Cardwell, southeast of Mildura.
Revised:  particularly Marco Medici, who remains in a coma at Alfred Hospital in Melbourne . The accident occured after the victims left a 16th birthday party along an isolated road in Cardwell, southeast of Mildura.
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Original:  particularly Marco Medici, who remains in a coma at  Alfred Hospital in Melbourne  The accident occured after the victims left a 16th birthday party along an isolated road in Cardwell, southeast of Mildura.
Revised:  particularly Marco Medici, who remains in a coma at Alfred Hospital in Melbourne The accident occurred after the teenagers left a 16th birthday party along an isolated road in Cardwell, southeast of Mildura.
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Original:  They were walking along the side of the road in a large group, when a car came speeding around a bend, hit the gravel on the side of the road, lost control and slammed into them, rending the groupapart as the car stopped in a hedge along the side of the road.
Revised:  A car allegedly came speeding around a bend, hit the gravel on the side of the road, lost control and slammed into them, rending the groupapart as the car stopped in a hedge along the side of the road.
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Original:  Help arrived as neighbours and those attending the party heard the commotion, but it was too late to save many of the victims, most of whom attended the same high school in Mildura . Mr. Towle is expected to face 6 counts of culpable driving and counts of failure to stop at the scene of an accident, which, if found guilty, could land him in jail for over 20 years.
Revised:  Help arrived as neighbours and those attending the party heard the commotion, but it was too late to save many of the victims, most of whom attended the same high school in Mildura . Towle has been charged with six charges of culpable driving and counts of failure to stop at the scene of an accident, which, if found guilty, could land him in jail for over 20 years.
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Original: Six teenagers were killed in a horrific road accident near Mildura in north-western Victoria,  late at night on February 18.
Revised: Six teenagers were killed in a horrific road accident near Mildura in north-western Victoria, Australia late at night on February 18.
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Original:  Seven other teenagers were injured, including 15-year-old Marco Medici who is now in a stable but critical condition in The Alfred Hospital in  Melbourne.
Revised:  Seven other teenagers were injured, including 15-year-old Marco Medici who is now in a stable but critical condition in The Alfred Hospital in w: Melbourne.
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Original: Thai Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra In the face of mounting pressure and a hostile political climate in urban areas, Thai Prime Minister , Thaksin Shinawatra has announced the disolution of the lower house of the country's parliament.
Revised: Thai Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra In the face of mounting pressure and a hostile political climate in urban areas, Thai Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra has announced the disolution of the lower house of the country's parliament.
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Original: Thai Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra In the face of mounting pressure and a hostile political climate in urban areas, Thai Prime Minister , Thaksin Shinawatra has announced the disolution of the lower house of the country's parliament.
Revised: Thai Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra In the face of mounting pressure and a hostile political climate in urban areas, Thai Prime Minister , Thaksin Shinawatra has announced the disolution of the Lower House of the country's parliament.
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Original:  The Christian university was established by his grandfather, the evangelist Bob Jones Sr  , in 1927.
Revised:  The Christian university was established by his grandfather, the evangelist Bob Jones Sr . , in 1927.
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Original:  It has ben the subject of much controversy because of, among other things, its racial policies and anti-Catholicism.
Revised:  It has been the subject of much controversy because of, among other things, its racial policies and anti-Catholicism.
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Original:   When George W. Bush made a speech at the non-accredited college, during his 2000  campaign, many critics questioned his judgment .
Revised:  When George W. Bush made a speech at the non-accredited college, during his 2000 presidential campaign, many critics questioned his judgment .
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Original:  ( That policy was subsequently dropped. ) Bob Jones III is an ardent supporter of George W. Bush.
Revised:  That policy was subsequently dropped. ) Bob Jones III is an ardent supporter of George W. Bush.
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Original:  ( That policy was subsequently dropped. ) Bob Jones III is an ardent supporter of George W. Bush.
Revised:  ( That policy was subsequently dropped. Bob Jones III is an ardent supporter of George W. Bush.
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Original:  ( That policy was subsequently dropped. ) Bob Jones III is an ardent supporter of George W. Bush.
Revised:  ( That policy was subsequently dropped. ) Jones is an ardent supporter of George W. Bush.
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Original:  ( That policy was subsequently dropped. ) Bob Jones III is an ardent supporter of George W. Bush.
Revised:  ( That policy was subsequently dropped. ) Bob Jones III is an ardent supporter of Bush.
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Original:  In his letter congratulating the president on his reelection, Jones wrote : Pull out all the stops and make a difference.
Revised:  In his letter congratulating the president on his reelection, Jones wrote , " Pull out all the stops and make a difference.
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Original:  If you have weaklings around you who do not share your biblical values, shed yourself of them. 
Revised:  If you have weaklings around you who do not share your biblical values, shed yourself of them. "
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Original: President Bush When George W. Bush made a speech at the non-accredited college during his 2000 presidential campaign, many critics questioned his judgment, asking why he would support a college with an offical ban on interracial dating.
Revised:  When George W. Bush made a speech at the non-accredited college during his 2000 presidential campaign, many critics questioned his judgment, asking why he would support a college with an offical ban on interracial dating.
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Original:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Economy and business Category:United States Category: Publishe 
Revised:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Economy and business Category:United States Category: Published 
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Original:  How can such a society make progress 
Revised:  How can such a society make progress ?
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Original:  Today, the English version of is taking part in a 24-hour 'blackout' to protest against two proposed U.S. anti-piracy laws, the and the .
Revised:  Today, the English version of is taking part in a 24-hour 'blackout' to protest two proposed U.S. anti-piracy laws, the and the .
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Original:  The action mirrors similar actions from other websites including and .
Revised:  The protest mirrors similar actions from other websites including and .
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Original:  People first started talking about SOPA more than a month ago.  started the straw poll in mid-December.
Revised:  People first started talking about SOPA more than a month ago. Jimmy started the straw poll in mid-December.
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Original: Basescu told the prosecutors at the High Court of Cassation and Justicethat they should resign if they couldn't stop Romania from becoming a mafia-like country.
Revised: Basescu told the prosecutors at the High Court of Cassation and Justice that they should resign if they couldn't stop Romania from becoming a mafia-like country.
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Original: The Romanian President, Traian Basescu yesterday talked about Romania as a "mafia country" and asked asked prosecutors to take immediate steps to eliminate the massive corruption which currently affects the country.
Revised: The Romanian President, Traian Basescu yesterday talked about Romania as a "mafia country" and asked prosecutors to take immediate steps to eliminate the massive corruption which currently affects the country.
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Original:  Basescu told the prosecutors at the High Court of Cassation and Justice that they should resign if they couldn't stop Romania from becoming a mafia-like country.
Revised:  Basescu told the prosecutors at the High Court of Cassation and Justice that they should resign if they can't do what it takes to ensure that Romania does not become a mafia-like country.
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Original: Map showing quake location from USGS Quake Center Some area residence reported that "An earthquake struck Ottawa, Canada at approximately 8:45 pm Eastern Time on February 24th, 2006." According to Natural Resources Canada  the earthquake of 4.5 magnitude struck Western Quebec on February 25th at approximately 1:39 UTC (Coordinated Universal Time) which is effectively GMT (Greenwich Mean Time).
Revised: Map showing quake location from USGS Quake Center "An earthquake struck Ottawa, Canada at approximately 8:45 pm Eastern Time on February 24th, 2006." According to Natural Resources Canada the earthquake of 4.5 magnitude struck Western Quebec on February 25th at approximately 1:39 UTC (Coordinated Universal Time) which is effectively GMT (Greenwich Mean Time).
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Original: Map showing quake location from USGS Quake Center Some area residence reported that "An earthquake struck Ottawa, Canada at approximately 8:45 pm Eastern Time on February 24th, 2006." According to Natural Resources Canada  the earthquake of 4.5 magnitude struck Western Quebec on February 25th at approximately 1:39 UTC (Coordinated Universal Time) which is effectively GMT (Greenwich Mean Time).
Revised: Map showing quake location from USGS Quake Center Some area residence reported that "An earthquake struck Ottawa, Canada at approximately 8:45 pm Eastern Time on February 24th, 2006." said one area resident. Natural Resources Canada the earthquake of 4.5 magnitude struck Western Quebec on February 25th at approximately 1:39 UTC (Coordinated Universal Time) which is effectively GMT (Greenwich Mean Time).
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Original: Map showing quake location from USGS Quake Center Some area residence reported that "An earthquake struck Ottawa, Canada at approximately 8:45 pm Eastern Time on February 24th, 2006." According to Natural Resources Canada  the earthquake of 4.5 magnitude struck Western Quebec on February 25th at approximately 1:39 UTC (Coordinated Universal Time) which is effectively GMT (Greenwich Mean Time).
Revised: Map showing quake location from USGS Quake Center Some area residence reported that "An earthquake struck Ottawa, Canada at approximately 8:45 pm Eastern Time on February 24th, 2006." According to Natural Resources Canada however says the earthquake of 4.5 magnitude struck Western Quebec on February 25th at approximately 1:39 UTC (Coordinated Universal Time) which is effectively GMT (Greenwich Mean Time).
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Original:  (Earthquakes are generally listed in UTC time to ensure an absolute and consistent basis of when they occurred.) and may have been felt a several hundred kilometres away.
Revised:  (Earthquakes are generally listed in UTC time to ensure an absolute and consistent basis of when they occurred.) This may have been felt a several hundred kilometres away.
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Original:  (Earthquakes are generally listed in UTC time to ensure an absolute and consistent basis of when they occurred.) and may have been felt a several hundred kilometres away.
Revised:  (Earthquakes are generally listed in UTC time to ensure an absolute and consistent basis of when they occurred.) and may have been felt several hundred kilometres away.
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Original:  The two largest damaging earthquakes for this region occured in "1935 (magnitude 6.1) at the northwestern end of the seismic zone, and in 1732 (magnitude 6.2) 450 km (280 mi) away at the southeastern end of the zone where it caused significant damage in Montreal."
Revised:  The two largest damaging earthquakes for this region occurred in "1935 (magnitude 6.1) at the northwestern end of the seismic zone, and in 1732 (magnitude 6.2) 450 km (280 mi) away at the southeastern end of the zone where it caused significant damage in Montreal."
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Original:  Natural Resources Canada however says the earthquake of 4.5 magnitude struck Western Quebec on February 25th at approximately 1:39 UTC (Coordinated Universal Time) which is effectively GMT (Greenwich Mean Time).
Revised:  Natural Resources Canada , however, says the earthquake of 4.5 magnitude struck Western Quebec on February 25th at approximately 1:39 UTC (Coordinated Universal Time) which is effectively GMT (Greenwich Mean Time).
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Original:  According to the Canadian Press the earthquake was centred north of Thurso, Quebec, "approximately 45 kilometre east-northeast of Ottawa, said John Adams, a seismologist with Natural Resources Canada."
Revised: = Located North of Thurso According to the Canadian Press the earthquake was centred north of Thurso, Quebec, "approximately 45 kilometre east-northeast of Ottawa, said John Adams, a seismologist with Natural Resources Canada."
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Original:  With  a reported depth of approx. 18 km, the Edinburgh earth observatory also demonstrates that this earthquake occurred near the  North American Plate.
Revised:  With The Edinburgh earth observatory also demonstrates that this earthquake, with a reported depth of approx. 18 km, the Edinburgh earth observatory also demonstrates that this earthquake occurred near the North American Plate.
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Original:  With  a reported depth of approx. 18 km, the Edinburgh earth observatory also demonstrates that this earthquake occurred near the  North American Plate.
Revised:  With a reported depth of approx. 18 km, occurred near the North American Plate.
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Original:  This is the third significant tremor in the Ottawa region of 2006.
Revised:  This is the third significant tremor in the region for 2006.
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Original: The Edinburgh earth observatory also demonstrates that this earthquake, with a reported depth of approx. 18 km, occurred near the w: North American Plate.
Revised: The Edinburgh earth observatory also demonstrates that this earthquake, with a reported depth of approx. 18 km, occurred near the North American Plate.
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Original: A conference entitled "Blogging, Journalism and Credibility: Battleground and Common Ground" has kicked off today at Harvard Kennedy School of Government.
Revised: A conference entitled "Blogging, Journalism and Credibility: Battleground and Common Ground" kicked off today at Harvard Kennedy School of Government.
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Original:  The invitation-only conference was organised by the Berkman Center for Internet and Society, the ALA's Office of Information Technology, and seeks to "bring together a select group of thoughtful bloggers and journalists".
Revised:  The Berkman Center for Internet and Society, the ALA's Office of Information Technology, and seeks to "bring together a select group of thoughtful bloggers and journalists".
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Original:  The invitation-only conference was organised by the Berkman Center for Internet and Society, the ALA's Office of Information Technology, and seeks to "bring together a select group of thoughtful bloggers and journalists".
Revised:  The invitation-only conference was organised by the Berkman Center for Internet and Society, the ALA's Office of Information Technology, organised the invitation-only conference. It sought to "bring together a select group of thoughtful bloggers and journalists".
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Original:  The conference comes in the wake of a major blow to the credibility of traditional journalism , when it was discovered that  Armstrong Williams, a prominent TV commentator in the USA, was payed $240,000 from Ketchum PR to "regularly comment on the No Child Left Behind (NCLB) campaign during the course of his broadcasts".
Revised:  The conference comes in the wake of a major blow to the credibility of traditional journalism when it was discovered that Armstrong Williams, a prominent TV commentator in the USA, was payed $240,000 from Ketchum PR to "regularly comment on the No Child Left Behind (NCLB) campaign during the course of his broadcasts".
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Original:  The conference comes in the wake of a major blow to the credibility of traditional journalism , when it was discovered that  Armstrong Williams, a prominent TV commentator in the USA, was payed $240,000 from Ketchum PR to "regularly comment on the No Child Left Behind (NCLB) campaign during the course of his broadcasts".
Revised:  The conference comes in the wake of a major blow to the credibility of traditional journalism , when it was discovered that Armstrong Williams, a prominent TV commentator in the United States, $240,000 from Ketchum PR to "regularly comment on the No Child Left Behind (NCLB) campaign during the course of his broadcasts".
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Original:  The conference comes in the wake of a major blow to the credibility of traditional journalism , when it was discovered that  Armstrong Williams, a prominent TV commentator in the USA, was payed $240,000 from Ketchum PR to "regularly comment on the No Child Left Behind (NCLB) campaign during the course of his broadcasts".
Revised:  The conference comes in the wake of a major blow to the credibility of traditional journalism , when it was discovered that Armstrong Williams, a prominent TV commentator in the USA, was payed $240,000 to "regularly comment on the No Child Left Behind (NCLB) campaign during the course of his broadcasts".
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Original:  The conference seeks to establish whether blogging can replace traditional journalism as a more credible source of infomation , and also how bloggers can deal with the issues of thier own credibility.
Revised:  The conference seeks to establish whether blogging can replace traditional journalism as a more credible source of infomation . It will also discuss how bloggers can deal with the issues of thier own credibility.
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Original:  The conference seeks to establish whether blogging can replace traditional journalism as a more credible source of infomation , and also how bloggers can deal with the issues of thier own credibility.
Revised:  The conference seeks to establish whether blogging can replace traditional journalism as a more credible source of infomation , and also how bloggers can deal with the issues involving their own credibility.
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Original:  Also being discussed in the conference is the credibility of wikis as sources of news . Jimmy Wales, founder of wikimedia (which wikinews is a part of ) has been speaking up the role that his organisation can play.
Revised:  The attendees of the conference will also discuss the credibility of wikis as sources of news . Jimmy Wales, founder of wikimedia (which wikinews is a part of ) has been speaking up the role that his organisation can play.
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Original:  Also being discussed in the conference is the credibility of wikis as sources of news . Jimmy Wales, founder of wikimedia (which wikinews is a part of ) has been speaking up the role that his organisation can play.
Revised:  Also being discussed in the conference is the credibility of wikis as news sources . Jimmy Wales, founder of wikimedia (which wikinews is a part of ) has been speaking up the role that his organisation can play.
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Original:  Also being discussed in the conference is the credibility of wikis as sources of news . Jimmy Wales, founder of wikimedia (which wikinews is a part of ) has been speaking up the role that his organisation can play.
Revised:  Also being discussed in the conference is the credibility of wikis as sources of news . Jimmy Wales, founder of Wikimedia (of which Wikinews is a part of ) has been speaking up the role that his organisation can play.
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Original:  Also being discussed in the conference is the credibility of wikis as sources of news . Jimmy Wales, founder of wikimedia (which wikinews is a part of ) has been speaking up the role that his organisation can play.
Revised:  Also being discussed in the conference is the credibility of wikis as sources of news . Jimmy Wales, founder of wikimedia (which wikinews is a part ) has been speaking up the role that his organisation can play.
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Original:  Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc. suggested that " one of the problems [with blogs]  is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
Revised:  " one of the problems [with blogs] is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
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Original:  Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc. suggested that " one of the problems [with blogs]  is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
Revised:  Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc. suggested that " One of the problems [with blogs] is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
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Original:  Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc. suggested that " one of the problems [with blogs]  is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
Revised:  Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc. suggested that " one of the problems [with blogs] ," said Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc., " is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
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Original: A conference entitled " Blogging, Journalism and Credibility: Battleground and Common Ground " kicked off today at Harvard's Kennedy School of Government .
Revised: A conference entitled " Blogging, Journalism and Credibility: Battleground and Common Ground conference today at Harvard's Kennedy School of Government .
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Original:  The conference comes in the wake of a major blow to the credibilityof traditional journalism when it was discovered that Ketchum PR paid Armstrong Williams, a prominent TV commentator in the United States, $240 , 000 to " regularly comment on the No Child Left Behind (NCLB) campaign during the course of his broadcasts " . The conferenceseeks to establish whether blogging can replace traditional journalism as a more credible source of information.
Revised:  Addressing the question of credibility , 000 to " regularly comment on the No Child Left Behind (NCLB) campaign during the course of his broadcasts " . The conferenceseeks to establish whether blogging can replace traditional journalism as a more credible source of information.
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Original:   References Blogging, Journalism Credibility Best seats in the house this weekend: IRC Pay to Play PR is Not On graph of the growth of wikipedia list of participants at the conferen
Revised:  Credibility Best seats in the house this weekend: IRC Pay to Play PR is Not On graph of the growth of wikipedia list of participants at the conferen
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