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Original:  Low-calorie intake has directly been correlated to negative energy balance which promotes low body mass index (BMI) and comparatively high plasma dehydroepiandrosterone (DHEA) for improved life expectancy.
Revised:  Low calorie intake has directly been correlated to negative energy balance which promotes low body mass index (BMI) and comparatively high plasma dehydroepiandrosterone (DHEA) for improved life expectancy.
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Original:  Calorie Restriction has widely been practiced by pregnant women and people with pre-existing medical conditions such as diabetes.
Revised:  Calorie restriction has widely been practiced by pregnant women and people with pre-existing medical conditions such as diabetes.
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Original:  Moderate CR in diabetic patients increases insulin sensitivity and reduces the amount of hepatic fat in obese individual and type-2 diabetes.
Revised:  Moderate CR in diabetic patients increases insulin sensitivity and reduces the amount of hepatic fat in obese individual and type 2 diabetes.
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Original:  The active stem cell function helps in enhanced recovery of the damaged skeletal muscle tissue, which is comparatively slow in older individuals than in younger individuals.
Revised:  The active stem cell function helps in enhanced recovery of the damaged skeletal muscle tissue, which is slower in older individuals than in younger individuals.
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Original:  The active stem cell function helps in enhanced recovery of the damaged skeletal muscle tissue, which is comparatively slow in older individuals than in younger individuals.
Revised:  The active stem cell function helps in enhanced recovery of the damaged skeletal muscle tissue, which is comparatively slow in older individuals compared to younger individuals.
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Original:  CR in the United States has shown a prolonged life span in women than a man as women tend to consume 25\% fewer calories than a man in their lifetime.
Revised:  CR in the United States has shown a prolonged life span in women compared to men as women tend to consume 25\% fewer calories than a man in their lifetime.
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Original:  CR in the United States has shown a prolonged life span in women than a man as women tend to consume 25\% fewer calories than a man in their lifetime.
Revised:  CR in the United States has shown a prolonged life span in women than a man as women tend to consume 25\% fewer calories than men in their lifetime.
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Original:  The statistical analysis of CR , available for anti-aging movement in humans is not sufficient enough to prove the prolonged lifespan associated with CR.
Revised:  The statistical analysis of CR available for anti-aging movement in humans is not sufficient enough to prove the prolonged lifespan associated with CR.
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Original:  One group states that there is a great deal of over-heated rhetoric in use with respect to life extension with over-optimistic projections on the part of its advocates.
Revised:  One group states that there is a great deal of over-heated rhetoric in use with respect to life extension with over-optimistic projections by its advocates.
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Original:  A study of the common supplements and hormone treatments used published in 2006 in the Cleveland Clinic Journal of Medicine showed that none of them are effective with respect to extending life.
Revised:  A study of the commonly-used supplements and hormone treatments used published in 2006 in the Cleveland Clinic Journal of Medicine showed that none of them are effective with respect to extending life.
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Original:  A study of the common supplements and hormone treatments used published in 2006 in the Cleveland Clinic Journal of Medicine showed that none of them are effective with respect to extending life.
Revised:  A study of the common supplements and hormone treatments published in 2006 in the Cleveland Clinic Journal of Medicine showed that none of them are effective with respect to extending life.
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Original:  A study of the common supplements and hormone treatments used published in 2006 in the Cleveland Clinic Journal of Medicine showed that none of them are effective with respect to extending life.
Revised:  A study of the common supplements and hormone treatments used published in 2006 in the Cleveland Clinic Journal of Medicine showed that none of them are effective for extending life.
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Original:  Another group notices that recent scientific successes in rejuvenation and extending the lifespan of model animals (mice 2.5 times, yeast and nematodes 10 times) and discovery of  variety of species (including humans of advanced ages) having negligible senescence give hope to achieve negligible senescence (cancel ageing ) for younger humans, reverse ageing, or at least significantly delay it.
Revised:  Another group notices that recent scientific successes in rejuvenation and extending the lifespan of model animals (mice 2.5 times, yeast and nematodes 10 times) and discovery of a variety of species (including humans of advanced ages) having negligible senescence give hope to achieve negligible senescence (cancel ageing ) for younger humans, reverse ageing, or at least significantly delay it.
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Original:  Another group notices that recent scientific successes in rejuvenation and extending the lifespan of model animals (mice 2.5 times, yeast and nematodes 10 times) and discovery of  variety of species (including humans of advanced ages) having negligible senescence give hope to achieve negligible senescence (cancel ageing ) for younger humans, reverse ageing, or at least significantly delay it.
Revised:  Another group notices that recent scientific successes in rejuvenation and extending the lifespan of model animals (mice 2.5 times, yeast and nematodes 10 times) and discovery of variety of species (including humans of advanced ages) having negligible senescence give hope to achieve negligible senescence (cancel aging ) for younger humans, reverse ageing, or at least significantly delay it.
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Original:  Death Aging Brian Hanley (biohacker) Senescence Negligible senescence Biological immortality Immortality Indefinite lifespan Longevity Transhumanism Extropianism Biogerontology Life extension List of life extension topics Index of life extension-related articles
Revised:  Death Aging Brian Hanley (biohacker) Senescence Negligible senescence Biological immortality Immortality Indefinite lifespan Longevity Transhumanism Extropianism Biogerontology List of life extension topics Index of life extension-related articles
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Original:  Two of the most popular proponents of the anti-aging movement include Ray Kurzweil, who says humanity can defeat aging through the advance of technology, and Aubrey De Grey, who says that the human body is a very complicated machine and, thus, can be repaired indefinitely.
Revised:  Two of the most popular proponents of the anti-aging movement include Ray Kurzweil, who says humanity can defeat aging through the advance of technology, and Aubrey de Grey, who says that the human body is a very complicated machine and, thus, can be repaired indefinitely.
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Original:  SDS is affiliated with several labs and centers: Data Truck serving researchers in the Department of Social and Decision Sciences Behavioral Economics and Decision Research Policy LabBehavioral Economics and Decision Research Policy Lab Center for Behavioral and Decision ResearchCenter for Behavioral and Decision Research Center for Risk Perception and CommunicationCenter for Risk Perception and Communication  Dynamic Decision Making LaboratoryDynamic Decision Making Laboratory
Revised:  SDS is affiliated with several labs and centers: Data Truck serving researchers in the Department of Social and Decision Sciences Behavioral Economics and Decision Research Policy LabBehavioral Economics and Decision Research Policy Lab Center for Behavioral and Decision ResearchCenter for Behavioral and Decision Research Center for Risk Perception and CommunicationCenter for Risk Perception and Communication Data-Driven Diversity LabData-Driven Diversity Lab Dynamic Decision Making LaboratoryDynamic Decision Making Laboratory
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Original: Henderson, J.A. et . al.
Revised: Henderson, J.A. et al.
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Original:  It holds that emotion and cognition, or feeling and thinking, are continually interacting with the other activity in the cortical network.
Revised:  It holds that affect and cognition, or feeling and thinking, are continually interacting with the other activity in the cortical network.
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Original:  External links About affect logic   Category: Psychothera 
Revised:  External links About affect logic Category: Psychotherapy 
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Original: Ciompi's notion of affect-logic was criticized in some subsequent reviews for being untestable and, as a result, atheoretical.
Revised: Ciompi's notion of affect-logic was criticized in some subsequent reviews for being not testable and, as a result, atheoretical.
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Original: Affect-logic is a notion, introduced in 1988 by Luc Ciompi, relating to Soteria  , which sheds light on the interaction between thinking and feeling.
Revised: Affect logic or affect-logic is a notion, introduced in 1988 by Luc Ciompi, relating to Soteria , which sheds light on the interaction between thinking and feeling.
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Original:  Ciompi developed this theoretical account for the purpose of understanding the psychological disorder known as Schizophrenia .
Revised:  Ciompi developed this theoretical account for the purpose of understanding the psychological disorder known as schizophrenia .
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Original:  Spitzer, M., 1993. untitled%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Noûs 27, 269–271., Lieberman, Stewart.
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Original:  Spitzer, M., 1993. untitled%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Noûs 27, 269–271., Lieberman, Stewart.
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Original: According to playwright steve carter , who wrote an award-winning play of the same name, a pecong is a "verbal battle of insults hurled in rhymed verse."
Revised: According to playwright Steve Carter , who wrote an award-winning play of the same name, a pecong is a "verbal battle of insults hurled in rhymed verse."
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Original: According to playwright Steve Carter, who wrote an award-winning play of the same name, a pecong is a "verbal battle of insults hurled in rhymed verse."
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Original:  See also Avoidance speech (mother-in-law languages) Call and response Diss track The dozens Extempo Mother insult Roast (comedy) Wolf ticket My Wife and Kids%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References
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Original:  The majority of her success has come  marathon races: she won the 2000 Turin Marathon in her debut over the distance and has gone on to win marathons in Paris, Madrid, Florence and Vienna.
Revised:  The majority of her success has come in marathon races: she won the 2000 Turin Marathon in her debut over the distance and has gone on to win marathons in Paris, Madrid, Florence and Vienna.
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Original:  Andrew's College in Grahamstown  and at the outbreak of World War I he joined the 14th Dismounted Rifles before going to England in 1915 and joining the Royal Flying Corps.
Revised:  Andrew's College in Grahamstown , and at the outbreak of World War I he joined the 14th Dismounted Rifles before going to England in 1915 and joining the Royal Flying Corps.
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Original:  Thomas Marson remembers Meintjies as follows: “ A fine pilot – you cannot keep him out of the air – he came to us from No. 60 Squadron, and was a tower of strength.
Revised:  Thomas Marson remembers Meintjes as follows: “ A fine pilot – you cannot keep him out of the air – he came to us from No. 60 Squadron, and was a tower of strength.
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Original:  Thomas Marson remembers Meintjies as follows: “ A fine pilot – you cannot keep him out of the air – he came to us from No. 60 Squadron, and was a tower of strength.
Revised:  Thomas Marson remembers Meintjies as follows: A fine pilot – you cannot keep him out of the air – he came to us from No. 60 Squadron, and was a tower of strength.
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Original:  ” After a long stay in hospital, he was posted to Central Flying School on 25 July 1918 as an instructor, receiving the Air Force Cross for his work there.
Revised:  After a long stay in hospital, he was posted to Central Flying School on 25 July 1918 as an instructor, receiving the Air Force Cross for his work there.
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Original:  On 2 May 1919 he was appointed Officer in Charge at No. 1Southern Aeroplane Repair Depot  , Farnborough, and was transferred to the RAF unemployed list on 14 June 1919.
Revised:  On 2 May 1919 he was appointed Officer in Charge at No. 1 Southern Aeroplane Repair Depot , Farnborough, and was transferred to the RAF unemployed list on 14 June 1919.
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Original: Thomas Marson remembers Meintjes as follows: A fine pilot – you cannot keep him out of the air – he came to us from No. 60 Squadron, and was a tower of strength.
Revised: Thomas Marson remembers Meintjes as follows: A fine pilot , you cannot keep him out of the air – he came to us from No. 60 Squadron, and was a tower of strength.
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Original: Thomas Marson remembers Meintjes as follows: A fine pilot – you cannot keep him out of the air – he came to us from No. 60 Squadron, and was a tower of strength.
Revised: Thomas Marson remembers Meintjes as follows: A fine pilot – you cannot keep him out of the air , he came to us from No. 60 Squadron, and was a tower of strength.
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Original: After a long stay in  hospital, he was posted to Central Flying School on 25 July 1918 as an instructor, receiving the Air Force Cross for his work there.
Revised: After a long stay in the hospital, he was posted to Central Flying School on 25 July 1918 as an instructor, receiving the Air Force Cross for his work there.
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Original: Origins and evolution  In the beggining of the 90s, when American television was  mainly ruled by three major networks (ABC, CBS and NBC), it was believed that the greatest achievement was to prommote and create content that would be directed towards a huge mass of people, avoiding completely those projects that might appeal only a reduced amount of people.
Revised: Origins and evolution on television In the beggining of the 90s, when American television was mainly ruled by three major networks (ABC, CBS and NBC), it was believed that the greatest achievement was to prommote and create content that would be directed towards a huge mass of people, avoiding completely those projects that might appeal only a reduced amount of people.
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Original: Origins and evolution  In the beggining of the 90s, when American television was  mainly ruled by three major networks (ABC, CBS and NBC), it was believed that the greatest achievement was to prommote and create content that would be directed towards a huge mass of people, avoiding completely those projects that might appeal only a reduced amount of people.
Revised: Origins and evolution In the beggining of the 90s, when American television was still mainly ruled by three major networks (ABC, CBS and NBC), it was believed that the greatest achievement was to prommote and create content that would be directed towards a huge mass of people, avoiding completely those projects that might appeal only a reduced amount of people.
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Original:   Nevertheless, this changed once independent stations, more cable channels, and the success of videocassettes started all increasing and rising, which gave the audiences the possibility of having more options.
Revised:  That was mainly due to the fact that specially in the earlier days of television, there was not much more competition. Nevertheless, this changed once independent stations, more cable channels, and the success of videocassettes started all increasing and rising, which gave the audiences the possibility of having more options.
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Original:  Thus, this previous mass-oriented point of view started to change towards one that was, obviously, narrower   .
Revised:  Thus, this previous mass-oriented point of view started to change towards one that was, obviously, narrower . .
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Original: This evolution from what is known as broadcasting to narrowcasting was discussed in 1993 by Hamid Naficy, who focused on this change specifically in Los Angeles and how such a content directed towards a much more narrowed audience affected social culture.
Revised: This evolution towards narrowcasting was discussed in 1993 by Hamid Naficy, who focused on this change specifically in Los Angeles and how such a content directed towards a much more narrowed audience affected social culture.
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Original:   This evolution towards narrowcasting was discussed in 1993 by Hamid Naficy, who focused on this change specifically in Los Angeles and how such a content directed towards a much more narrowed audience affected social culture.
Revised: Nowadays, despite the fact that the major networks keep promoting mostly content which's main aim is to get to a huge audience, narrowcasting has of course made its place in, for example, the way they schedule shows. For example, while one night they might choose to stream shows directed to teenagers, a different night they might want to focus on another specific kind of audience, such as those interested on documentaries. Therefore, they will be targeting what could be seen as a narrow audience, but collect their attention altogether as a mass audience on one night. This evolution towards narrowcasting was discussed in 1993 by Hamid Naficy, who focused on this change specifically in Los Angeles and how such a content directed towards a much more narrowed audience affected social culture.
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Original:   This evolution towards narrowcasting was discussed in 1993 by Hamid Naficy, who focused on this change specifically in Los Angeles and how such a content directed towards a much more narrowed audience affected social culture.
Revised:  Social impact This evolution towards narrowcasting was discussed in 1993 by Hamid Naficy, who focused on this change specifically in Los Angeles and how such a content directed towards a much more narrowed audience affected social culture.
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Original:  JSTOR, JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/3013230.Therefore, more content that did not have the pressure to have a mass audience that was appealed to watch it was able to be produced and promoted, what made it easier for minorities to feel represented in television .
Revised:  JSTOR, JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/3013230.Therefore, more content that did not have the pressure to have a mass audience that was appealed to watch it was able to be produced and promoted, what made it easier for minorities to feel represented in television 
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Original: It was precisely the arrival of cable TV what allowed a much more bigger amount of producers and programmers to aim at smaller audiences.
Revised: It was precisely the arrival of cable TV what allowed a much larger amount of producers and programmers to aim at smaller audiences.
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Original: Origins and evolution on television In the beggining of the 90s , when American television was still mainly ruled by three major networks (ABC, CBS and NBC), it was believed that the greatest achievement was to prommote and create content that would be directed towards a huge mass of people, avoiding completely those projects that might appeal only a reduced amount of people.
Revised: Origins and evolution on television In the beginning of the 1990s , when American television was still mainly ruled by three major networks (ABC, CBS and NBC), it was believed that the greatest achievement was to prommote and create content that would be directed towards a huge mass of people, avoiding completely those projects that might appeal only a reduced amount of people.
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Original: Origins and evolution on television In the beggining of the 90s , when American television was still mainly ruled by three major networks (ABC, CBS and NBC), it was believed that the greatest achievement was to prommote and create content that would be directed towards a huge mass of people, avoiding completely those projects that might appeal only a reduced amount of people.
Revised: Origins and evolution on television In the beggining of the 90s , when American television was still mainly ruled by three major networks (ABC, CBS and NBC), it was believed that the greatest achievement was to promote and create content that would be directed towards a huge mass of people, avoiding completely those projects that might appeal only a reduced amount of people.
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Original:  “ From Broadcasting to Narrowcasting: Middle Eastern Diaspora in Los Angeles.
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Original:  ” Middle East Report, no. 180, 1993, pp. 31–34.
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Original:  The theory being that, by identifying particular demographics viewing such programmes , advertisers can better target their markets.
Revised:  The theory being that, by identifying particular demographics viewing such programs , advertisers can better target their markets.
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Original:  Pre-recorded television programmes are often broadcast to captive audiences in taxi cabs, buses, elevators and queues (such as at branches of the Post Office in the United Kingdom).
Revised:  Pre-recorded television programs are often broadcast to captive audiences in taxi cabs, buses, elevators and queues (such as at branches of the Post Office in the United Kingdom).
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Original:  For instance, the Cabvision network in London's black cabs shows limited pre-recorded television programmes interspersed with targeted advertising to taxicab passengers.
Revised:  For instance, the Cabvision network in London's black cabs shows limited pre-recorded television programs interspersed with targeted advertising to taxicab passengers.
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Original:  Dr. Jonathan Sterne of McGill University stated, "Narrowcasting is a form of broadcasting, if the latter term is understood as the 'wide dissemination of content through mechanical or electronic media' . "  Dr. Jonathan Sterne defining Narrowcasting Other one-way, traditional media approaches to narrowcasting, such as Internet Talk Radio, can be contrasted with broadcast radio programs.
Revised:  Dr. Jonathan Sterne of McGill University stated, "Narrowcasting is a form of broadcasting, if the latter term is understood as the 'wide dissemination of content through mechanical or electronic media' " Dr. Jonathan Sterne defining Narrowcasting Other one-way, traditional media approaches to narrowcasting, such as Internet Talk Radio, can be contrasted with broadcast radio programs.
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