wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Schlafly holds the position that men and women are fundamentally different, and resists what she terms the "feminist [propagandist]" assertion that "we must redesign society to become gender neutral and that men must shed their macho image and remake themselves to become househusbands".
Revised: Schlafly holds the position that men and women are fundamentally different, and resisted what she termed the "feminist [propagandist]" assertion that "we must redesign society to become gender neutral and that men must shed their macho image and remake themselves to become househusbands".
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Original:  Instead, she believes that nothing can eradicate the differences between men and women.
Revised:  Instead, she believed that nothing can eradicate the differences between men and women.
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Original:  Schlafly argues that although her feminist opponents seek to minimize the differences between men and women, "they will have to take up their complaint with God," because "no other power" can alter the fundamental and necessary differences between men and women.
Revised:  Schlafly argued that although her feminist opponents seek to minimize the differences between men and women, "they will have to take up their complaint with God," because "no other power" can alter the fundamental and necessary differences between men and women.
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Original:  Schlafly, however, exalts the differences between men and women: "Feminine means accentuating the womanly attributes that make women deliciously different from men.
Revised:  Schlafly, however, exalted the differences between men and women: "Feminine means accentuating the womanly attributes that make women deliciously different from men.
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Original: Men's and women's roles in marriage In marriage, Schlafly argues , men and women's roles are different and should remain so, in spite of ERA-related feminist efforts to equalize their roles.
Revised: Men's and women's roles in marriage In marriage, Schlafly argued , men and women's roles are different and should remain so, in spite of ERA-related feminist efforts to equalize their roles.
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Original:  Schlafly defends her stance as one necessary to order instead of a threat to equality;
Revised:  Schlafly defended her stance as one necessary to order instead of a threat to equality;
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Original:  she says , "If marriage is to be a successful institution, it must...have an ultimate decision maker, and that is the husband".
Revised:  she said , "If marriage is to be a successful institution, it must...have an ultimate decision maker, and that is the husband".
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Original: Schlafly also believes that motherhood is crucial to the well being of society;
Revised: Schlafly also believed that motherhood is crucial to the well being of society;
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Original:  Schlafly's view contrasts directly with what she claims is the pro-ERA feminist perspective that caring for children and a husband is demeaning, and that women should not have to be directly responsible for their children if they desire to instead pursue a career.
Revised:  Schlafly's view contrasts directly with what she claimed is the pro-ERA feminist perspective that caring for children and a husband is demeaning, and that women should not have to be directly responsible for their children if they desire to instead pursue a career.
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Original:  Schlafly, however, stands firm that woman's main role should be that of a mother, even in this modern century;
Revised:  Schlafly, however, stood firm that woman's main role should be that of a mother, even in this modern century;
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Original: Family Schlafly acknowledges that motherhood and family life are difficult, but contends that the family is still the place of greatest growth and satisfaction for women.
Revised: Family Schlafly acknowledged that motherhood and family life are difficult, but contends that the family is still the place of greatest growth and satisfaction for women.
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Original:  Schlafly rejects what she claims is the feminist view that the family is an "anachronism" that binds women down.
Revised:  Schlafly rejected what she claimed is the feminist view that the family is an "anachronism" that binds women down.
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Original:  Instead, she says , "Faith, commitment, hard work, family, and children, and grandchildren still offer the most fulfillment, as well as our reach into the future.
Revised:  Instead, she said , "Faith, commitment, hard work, family, and children, and grandchildren still offer the most fulfillment, as well as our reach into the future.
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Original:  Schlafly believes that the family supports society as its meets women's needs: "The strength and stability of families determines the vitality and moral life of society;
Revised:  Schlafly believed that the family supports society as its meets women's needs: "The strength and stability of families determines the vitality and moral life of society;
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Original:  Schlafly states unequivocally that "the future of our nation depends on children who grow up to be good citizens, and the best way of achieving that goal is to have emotionally stable, intact families".
Revised:  Schlafly stated unequivocally that "the future of our nation depends on children who grow up to be good citizens, and the best way of achieving that goal is to have emotionally stable, intact families".
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Original:  Schlafly rejects the 70s and 80s-era feminist "rejection of the family" as an outdated establishment, which she believes "flies in the face of all human experience";
Revised:  Schlafly rejected the 70s and 80s-era feminist "rejection of the family" as an outdated establishment, which she believes "flies in the face of all human experience";
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Original:  Schlafly rejects the 70s and 80s-era feminist "rejection of the family" as an outdated establishment, which she believes "flies in the face of all human experience";
Revised:  Schlafly rejects the 70s and 80s-era feminist "rejection of the family" as an outdated establishment, which she believed "flies in the face of all human experience";
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Original:  instead, she believes that "the family is the proven best way for men and women to live together on this earth.
Revised:  instead, she believed that "the family is the proven best way for men and women to live together on this earth.
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Original: Women and employment Schlafly believes that motherhood is the best job option for women seeking career fulfillment, and that "it is ludicrous to suggest that [other jobs] are more self-fulfilling than the daily duties of a wife and mother in the home".
Revised: Women and employment Schlafly believed that motherhood is the best job option for women seeking career fulfillment, and that "it is ludicrous to suggest that [other jobs] are more self-fulfilling than the daily duties of a wife and mother in the home".
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Original:  Though it can be necessary for some women to work outside the home, Schlafly states that motherhood proffers the most satisfaction of any job, and "most women would rather cuddle a baby than a typewriter or factory machine.
Revised:  Though it can be necessary for some women to work outside the home, Schlafly stated that motherhood proffers the most satisfaction of any job, and "most women would rather cuddle a baby than a typewriter or factory machine.
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Original:  Schlafly objects to what she sees as the feminist assertion that women are paid less than men or are otherwise discriminated against in the work force;
Revised:  Schlafly objected to what she sees as the feminist assertion that women are paid less than men or are otherwise discriminated against in the work force;
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Original:  Schlafly objects to what she sees as the feminist assertion that women are paid less than men or are otherwise discriminated against in the work force;
Revised:  Schlafly objects to what she saw as the feminist assertion that women are paid less than men or are otherwise discriminated against in the work force;
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Original:  she says , "a deceitful propaganda campaign has been orchestrated by the feminist movement to convince the American people that" women who take paying jobs receive fewer wages on the dollar than men who do the same work.
Revised:  she said , "a deceitful propaganda campaign has been orchestrated by the feminist movement to convince the American people that" women who take paying jobs receive fewer wages on the dollar than men who do the same work.
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Original:  This, she claims , "is part of the feminists' denigration of the role of motherhood...
Revised:  This, she claimed , "is part of the feminists' denigration of the role of motherhood...
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Original:  In fact, Schlafly believes , even if men really do earn more than women, this is beneficial to society as a whole, because, "we want a society in which the average man earns more than the average woman so that his earnings can fulfill his provider role in providing a home and support for his wife who is nurturing and mothering their children".
Revised:  In fact, Schlafly believed , even if men really do earn more than women, this is beneficial to society as a whole, because, "we want a society in which the average man earns more than the average woman so that his earnings can fulfill his provider role in providing a home and support for his wife who is nurturing and mothering their children".
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Original:  Schlafly explains , "Just because there is a small percentage of women in senior management does not prove discrimination.
Revised:  Schlafly explained , "Just because there is a small percentage of women in senior management does not prove discrimination.
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Original:  Schlafly also objects to wage and other equality for women in the work force because they destroy mothers' protection from over-time work, which makes it "more difficult for women to perform their domestic duties".
Revised:  Schlafly also objected to wage and other equality for women in the work force because they destroy mothers' protection from over-time work, which makes it "more difficult for women to perform their domestic duties".
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Original:  Similarly, Schlafly states , "We certainly don't want a society in which the average wage paid to all women equals [that of] men, because that society would have eliminated the role of motherhood".
Revised:  Similarly, Schlafly stated , "We certainly don't want a society in which the average wage paid to all women equals [that of] men, because that society would have eliminated the role of motherhood".
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Original: According to the WHO, a preterm birth is defined as "babies born alive before 37 weeks of pregnancy are URL According to this classification, there are three sub-categories of preterm birth, based on gestational age: extremely preterm ( less than 28 weeks), very preterm (28 to 32 weeks), moderate to late preterm (32 to 37 weeks).
Revised: According to the WHO, a preterm birth is defined as "babies born alive before 37 weeks of pregnancy are URL According to this classification, there are three sub-categories of preterm birth, based on gestational age: extremely preterm ( fewer than 28 weeks), very preterm (28 to 32 weeks), moderate to late preterm (32 to 37 weeks).
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Original:  Babies who were less than 28 weeks of gestational age, or weighed less than 1000 grams, or less than 35 cm in length – even if they showed some sign of life (breathing, heartbeat, voluntary muscle movement) – were classified as "live fetuses" rather than "live births."
Revised:  Babies who were fewer than 28 weeks of gestational age, or weighed less than 1000 grams, or less than 35 cm in length – even if they showed some sign of life (breathing, heartbeat, voluntary muscle movement) – were classified as "live fetuses" rather than "live births."
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Original:  Babies who were less than 28 weeks of gestational age, or weighed less than 1000 grams, or less than 35 cm in length – even if they showed some sign of life (breathing, heartbeat, voluntary muscle movement) – were classified as "live fetuses" rather than "live births."
Revised:  Babies who were less than 28 weeks of gestational age, or weighed fewer than 1000 grams, or less than 35 cm in length – even if they showed some sign of life (breathing, heartbeat, voluntary muscle movement) – were classified as "live fetuses" rather than "live births."
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Original:  Babies who were less than 28 weeks of gestational age, or weighed less than 1000 grams, or less than 35 cm in length – even if they showed some sign of life (breathing, heartbeat, voluntary muscle movement) – were classified as "live fetuses" rather than "live births."
Revised:  Babies who were less than 28 weeks of gestational age, or weighed less than 1000 grams, or fewer than 35 cm in length – even if they showed some sign of life (breathing, heartbeat, voluntary muscle movement) – were classified as "live fetuses" rather than "live births."
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Original: Factors affecting it Child's gestational age at birth (pregnancy length) is associated with various likely causal maternal non-genetic factors: stress during pregnancy, age, parity, smoking, infection and inflammation, BMI. Also, preexisting maternal medical conditions with genetic component, e.g., diabetes mellitus type 1, systemic lupus erythematosus, anaemia.
Revised: Factors affecting pregnancy length Child's gestational age at birth (pregnancy length) is associated with various likely causal maternal non-genetic factors: stress during pregnancy, age, parity, smoking, infection and inflammation, BMI. Also, preexisting maternal medical conditions with genetic component, e.g., diabetes mellitus type 1, systemic lupus erythematosus, anaemia.
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Original: Methods According to American Congress of Obstetricians and Gynecologists, the main methods to calculate gestational age are:Obstetric Data Definitions Issues and Rationale for Change - Gestational Age & Term from Patient Safety and Quality Improvement at American Congress of Obstetricians and Gynecologists.
Revised: Methods According to American College of Obstetricians and Gynecologists, the main methods to calculate gestational age are:Obstetric Data Definitions Issues and Rationale for Change - Gestational Age & Term from Patient Safety and Quality Improvement at American Congress of Obstetricians and Gynecologists.
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Original: According to the WHO, a preterm birth is defined as "babies born alive before 37 weeks of pregnancy are URL According to this classification, there are three sub-categories of preterm birth, based on gestational age: extremely preterm (fewer than 28 weeks), very preterm (28 to 32 weeks), moderate to late preterm (32 to 37 weeks).
Revised: According to the WHO, a preterm birth is defined as "babies born alive before 37 weeks of pregnancy are completed." According to this classification, there are three sub-categories of preterm birth, based on gestational age: extremely preterm (fewer than 28 weeks), very preterm (28 to 32 weeks), moderate to late preterm (32 to 37 weeks).
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Original:  The WHO defines the perinatal period as "The perinatal period commences at 22 completed weeks (154 days) of gestation and ends seven completed days after URL Perinatal mortality is the death of fetuses or neonates during the perinatal period.
Revised:  The WHO defines the perinatal period as "The perinatal period commences at 22 completed weeks (154 days) of gestation and ends seven completed days after birth." Perinatal mortality is the death of fetuses or neonates during the perinatal period.
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Original:  When the show opened, Broadway had been in a commercial slump, yet in spite of this and negative press, Sex was a Broadway fan-favorite, playing to full audiences.
Revised:  When the show opened, Broadway had been in a commercial slump, yet in spite of this and negative press, Sex played to full audiences.
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Original:  The show was directed by renowned Canadian director Peter Hinton and designed by Eo Sharpe.
Revised:  The show was directed by Canadian director Peter Hinton and designed by Eo Sharpe.
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Original:  An corrupt officer of the law Agnes –
Revised:  A corrupt officer of the law Agnes –
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Original:  A prostitute and best friend of Margy LaMont Red – A prostitute Flossie – A prostitute Jones – A client Lieutenant Gregg – An English Naval officer Captain Carter– An officer Condez – Host of the Café Port-au-Prince Clara Stanton – A wealthy woman Jimmy Stanton – Son of Clara Stanton Robert Stanton – Husband of Clara Stanton and father of Jimmy Stanton Marie – The Stantons' French maid Jenkins – The Stantons' butler Policeman – A policeman First Man Second Man Waiter
Revised:  A prostitute and best friend of Margy LaMont Red – A prostitute Flossie – A prostitute Jones – A client Lieutenant Gregg – An English Naval officer Captain Carter– An officer Condez – Host of the Café Port-au-Prince Clara Stanton – A wealthy woman Jimmy Stanton – Son of Clara Stanton Robert Stanton – Husband of Clara Stanton and father of Jimmy Stanton Marie – The Stantons' French maid Jenkins – The Stantons' butler Policeman First Man Second Man Waiter
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Original:  It was eventually shut by the police due to obscenity and West spent time in jail because of it.
Revised:  It was eventually shut by the NYPD due to obscenity and West spent time in jail because of it.
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Original: Alcohol consumption alters the drinker's self-image by "enhancing feelings of self-appraisal and even narcissism . "  Alcohol inhibits sophisticated levels of mental processing that are necessary to recognize personal flaws.
Revised: Alcohol consumption alters the drinker's self-image by "enhancing feelings of self-appraisal and even narcissism " Alcohol inhibits sophisticated levels of mental processing that are necessary to recognize personal flaws.
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Original: Alcohol consumption alters the drinker's self-image by "enhancing feelings of self-appraisal and even narcissism . "  Alcohol inhibits sophisticated levels of mental processing that are necessary to recognize personal flaws.
Revised: Alcohol consumption alters the drinker's self-image by "enhancing feelings of self-appraisal and even narcissism . " . Alcohol inhibits sophisticated levels of mental processing that are necessary to recognize personal flaws.
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Original:  In this way, drunk individuals can be described as “ slaves to the present moment .” By leading the brain to overreact to present cues and disregard the implications of one’s actions, alcohol often provokes aggressive behavior.
Revised:  In this way, drunk individuals can be described as " slaves to the present moment .” By leading the brain to overreact to present cues and disregard the implications of one’s actions, alcohol often provokes aggressive behavior.
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Original:  In this way, drunk individuals can be described as “ slaves to the present moment .” By leading the brain to overreact to present cues and disregard the implications of one’s actions, alcohol often provokes aggressive behavior.
Revised:  In this way, drunk individuals can be described as “ slaves to the present moment ". By leading the brain to overreact to present cues and disregard the implications of one’s actions, alcohol often provokes aggressive behavior.
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Original:  Alcohol consumption can result in a “ Jekyll and Hyde ” effect in individuals who are typically amiable when sober but are perhaps predisposed to aggressive behavior.
Revised:  Alcohol consumption can result in a " Jekyll and Hyde ” effect in individuals who are typically amiable when sober but are perhaps predisposed to aggressive behavior.
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Original:  Alcohol consumption can result in a “ Jekyll and Hyde ” effect in individuals who are typically amiable when sober but are perhaps predisposed to aggressive behavior.
Revised:  Alcohol consumption can result in a “ Jekyll and Hyde " effect in individuals who are typically amiable when sober but are perhaps predisposed to aggressive behavior.
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Original:  By depriving her of the attention capacity necessary to process undesirable thoughts, alcohol myopia can bring the drinker a sense of relief.
Revised:  By depriving the individual of the attention capacity necessary to process undesirable thoughts, alcohol myopia can bring the drinker a sense of relief.
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Original:  Overall, the self-inflating effect of alcohol can increase the drinker's self-confidence and therefore lead him or her to engage in activities or social situations that would normally make her or him nervous or uncomfortable when sober.
Revised:  Overall, the self-inflating effect of alcohol can increase the drinker's self-confidence and therefore lead them to engage in activities or social situations that would normally make her or him nervous or uncomfortable when sober.
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Original: Alcohol exaggerates the drinker's perception of the world around him .
Revised: Alcohol exaggerates the drinker's perception of the world around them .
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Original:  Additionally, in situations in which inhibitory cues are the most salient, the individual may behave in a more prudent or passive manner than he would when sober.
Revised:  Additionally, in situations in which inhibitory cues are the most salient, the individual may behave in a more prudent or passive manner than they would when sober.
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Original:  Being aware of irrelevant information is the first step in overcoming this common barrier   .
Revised:  Being aware of irrelevant information is the first step in overcoming this common barrier . .
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Original: Problem solving consists of using generic or ad hoc methods in an orderly manner to find solutions to problems.
Revised: Problem solving consists of using generic or ad hoc methods in an orderly manner to find solutions to difficulties.
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Original:  Some of the problem-solving techniques developed and used in philosophy, artificial intelligence, computer science, engineering, mathematics, medicine and societies in general are related to mental problem-solving techniques studied in psychology and cognitive sciences.
Revised:  Some of the problem-solving techniques developed and used in philosophy, medicine, societies, mathematics, engineering, computer science, engineering, mathematics, medicine and societies in general are related to mental problem-solving techniques studied in psychology and cognitive sciences.
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Original:  Some of the problem-solving techniques developed and used in philosophy, artificial intelligence, computer science, engineering, mathematics, medicine and societies in general are related to mental problem-solving techniques studied in psychology and cognitive sciences.
Revised:  Some of the problem-solving techniques developed and used in philosophy, artificial intelligence, computer science, and artificial intelligence in general are related to mental problem-solving techniques studied in psychology and cognitive sciences.
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Original:  The indictment against Stipe was put on hold due to mental competency issues raised during a probation revocation hearing in a previous case against him, and Francis Stipe subsequently died following his guilty plea in the indictment.
Revised:  The indictment against Stipe was put on hold due to mental competency issues raised during a probation revocation hearing relating to a previous case against him, and Francis Stipe subsequently died following his guilty plea in the indictment.
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