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Original: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) '' - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 Le Ring (The Fight ) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) '' - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring ) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) '' - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 Le Ring (The Fight ) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) '' - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 Le Ring (The Fight ) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 ( À vos marques...
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Original:  Party! 2 (Take The Plunge 2) - as Frédérick Bédard (filming) 2009 Lance et Compte: Le grand duel - Guy Lambert
Revised:  Party! 2 )'' - as Frédérick Bédard (filming) 2009 Lance et Compte: Le grand duel - Guy Lambert
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 : Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 : Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 : Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 : Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 : Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 : Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 : Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 : The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 : Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original: Filmography 1996  Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001  Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002  Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002  Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004  Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006  Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007  The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008  Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 The Ring (Le Ring) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 : Taking the Plunge 2 (À vos marques...
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Original:  Party! 2) '' - as Frédérick Bédard (filming) 2009  Lance et Compte: Le grand duel - Guy Lambert 
Revised:  Party! 2) - as Frédérick Bédard (filming) 2009 Lance et Compte: Le grand duel - Guy Lambert 
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Original:  Party! 2) '' - as Frédérick Bédard (filming) 2009  Lance et Compte: Le grand duel - Guy Lambert 
Revised:  Party! 2) '' - as Frédérick Bédard (filming) 2009 : Lance et Compte: Le grand duel - Guy Lambert 
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Original: File:Charles van Commenée.jpg|250px|Charles van Commenee at the welcoming of the Netherlands team at the 2008 Summer Olympics]] Charles van Commenee, written in Dutch as Charles van Commenée, (born June 22, 1958) is a Dutch athletics coach.
Revised: File:Charles van Commenée.jpg|250px|Charles van Commenee at the welcoming of the Netherlands team at the 2008 Summer Olympics]] Charles van Commenee, written in Dutch as van Commenée, (born June 22, 1958) is a Dutch athletics coach.
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Original:  After a term as national coach for the Netherlands , he served as head coach of UK Athletics from 2008 to 2012.
Revised:  After a term as national coach for the Netherlands , he served as head coach of British Athletics from 2008 to 2012.
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Original:  After a term as Performance Director for the Dutch Olympic Committee, he served as head coach of British Athletics from 2008 to 2012.
Revised:  After a term as Performance Director for the Dutch Olympic Committee, he served as Head Coach of British Athletics from 2008 to 2012.
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Original:  As a young man he was interested in athletics, competing in the decathlon and 200 metres events at club level, but a hamstring injury forced him to give up the sport.
Revised:  As a young man he was interested in athletics, competing in the decathlon at club level, but a hamstring injury forced him to give up the sport.
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Original:  As a young man he was interested in athletics, competing in the decathlon and 200 metres events at club level, but a hamstring injury forced him to give up the sport.
Revised:  As a young man he was interested in athletics, competing in the decathlon and 200 metres events at club level, but several injuries forced him to give up the sport.
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Original: File:Charles van Commenée.jpg|250px|Charles van Commenee at the welcoming of the Netherlands team at the 2008 Summer Olympics]] Charles van Commenee, written in Dutch as van Commenée, (born June 22 , 1958) is a Dutch athletics coach.
Revised: File:Charles van Commenée.jpg|250px|Charles van Commenee at the welcoming of the Netherlands team at the 2008 Summer Olympics]] Charles van Commenee, written in Dutch as van Commenée, (born 22 , 1958) is a Dutch athletics coach.
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Original: File:Charles van Commenée.jpg|250px|Charles van Commenee at the welcoming of the Netherlands team at the 2008 Summer Olympics]] Charles van Commenee, written in Dutch as van Commenée, (born June 22 , 1958) is a Dutch athletics coach.
Revised: File:Charles van Commenée.jpg|250px|Charles van Commenee at the welcoming of the Netherlands team at the 2008 Summer Olympics]] Charles van Commenee, written in Dutch as van Commenée, (born June 22 June 1958) is a Dutch athletics coach.
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Original: History Since ancient times, people from various ethnic groups of Indonesia (then known as the Malay archipelago or "Nusantara") have been leaving their hometowns to other parts of the world for purposes of trade, education, labor, or travel.
Revised: History Since ancient times, people from various ethnic groups of Indonesia have been leaving their hometowns to other parts of the world for purposes of trade, education, labor, or travel.
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Original: Martin van Niekerk (born Izak Marthinus van Niekerk on May 29 , 1989) is a South African-born Namibian cricketer.
Revised: Martin van Niekerk (born Izak Marthinus van Niekerk on 29 , 1989) is a South African-born Namibian cricketer.
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Original:  Kalonji and General Dinanga were placed under house arrest, while the other South Kasain ministers were imprisoned in a single home.
Revised:  Kalonji and General Dinanga were placed under house arrest, while the other South Kasaian ministers were imprisoned in a single home.
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Original:  At its height, South Kasainumbered around a million inhabitants and of territory, though its borders frequently changed  .
Revised:  South Kasai's borders frequently changed .
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Original: Category:Medical signs Category: Cardiology Cannon A waves, or cannon atrial waves, are waves seen occasionally in the jugular vein of humans with certain cardiac arrhythmias.
Revised: Category:Medical signs Category: Cannon A waves, or cannon atrial waves, are waves seen occasionally in the jugular vein of humans with certain cardiac arrhythmias.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% 1 2%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% It is associated with heart block, in particular third-degree (complete) heart block.
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Original:  3%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% It is also seen in pulmonary hypertension.
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Original:  3%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% It is also seen in pulmonary hypertension.
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Original:  3%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Cannon A waves may also be seen in ventricular tachycardia due to the inherent AV dissociation of the arrhythmia.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Cannon A waves may also be seen in ventricular tachycardia due to the inherent AV dissociation of the arrhythmia.
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Original:  3%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Cannon A waves may also be seen in ventricular tachycardia due to the inherent AV dissociation of the arrhythmia.
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Original: Cannon A waves, or cannon atrial waves, are waves seen occasionally in the jugular vein of humans with certain cardiac arrhythmias.
Revised: Canon A waveCannon A waves, or cannon atrial waves, are waves seen occasionally in the jugular vein of humans with certain cardiac arrhythmias.
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Original:  Demjanjuk appealed his extradition with the case heard on 8 July 1985.
Revised:  Demjanjuk appealed his extradition ; in a hearing on 8 July 1985.
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Original:  Demjanjuk appealed his extradition with the case heard on 8 July 1985.
Revised:  Demjanjuk appealed his extradition with the case heard on 8 July 1985,
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Original:  On 31 March 2012, it was reported that John Demjanjuk was buried at an undisclosed US location , now known to be the Ukrainian section of the Brooklyn Heights cemetery in Parma, Ohio .
Revised:  On 31 March 2012, it was reported that John Demjanjuk was buried at an undisclosed US location .
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Original: Afer a final return to Iran, Roshdieh established a new school and a magazine in 1904, both called Maktab.
Revised: After a final return to Iran, Roshdieh established a new school and a magazine in 1904, both called Maktab.
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Original:  In his new method of teaching, Roshdieh used the concept of sounds instead of alphabet letters to teach Persian and Azerbaijani Turkish languages( which use the Arabic script ) . During his four years of managing his school in Yerevan, Roshdieh wrote Vatan Dili (The Language of the Homeland) in Azerbaijani, which was taught in several schools of the Caucasus as a primer until the October Revolution.
Revised:  In his new method of teaching, Roshdieh used the concept of sounds instead of alphabetic letters to teach Persian and Azerbaijani Turkish languages( which use the Arabic script ) . During his four years of managing his school in Yerevan, Roshdieh wrote Vatan Dili (The Language of the Homeland) in Azerbaijani, which was taught in several schools of the Caucasus as a primer until the October Revolution.
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Original:  In his new method of teaching, Roshdieh used the concept of sounds instead of alphabet letters to teach Persian and Azerbaijani Turkish languages( which use the Arabic script ) . During his four years of managing his school in Yerevan, Roshdieh wrote Vatan Dili (The Language of the Homeland) in Azerbaijani, which was taught in several schools of the Caucasus as a primer until the October Revolution.
Revised:  In his new method of teaching, Roshdieh used the concept of sounds instead of alphabet letters to teach Persian and Azerbaijani Turkish languages( which use the Arabic script . During his four years of managing his school in Yerevan, Roshdieh wrote Vatan Dili (The Language of the Homeland) in Azerbaijani, which was taught in several schools of the Caucasus as a primer until the October Revolution.
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Original:  He emigrated to the United States after the German revolutions of 1848–49 and became a prominent member of the new Republican Party.
Revised:  He immigrated to the United States after the German revolutions of 1848–49 and became a prominent member of the new Republican Party.
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Original:  Like many other "Forty-Eighters," he then emigrated to the United States, settling in Watertown, Wisconsin, in 1852.
Revised:  Like many other "Forty-Eighters," he then immigrated to the United States, settling in Watertown, Wisconsin, in 1852.
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Original:  Emigration to America While in London, Schurz married fellow revolutionary Johannes Ronge's sister-in-law, Margarethe Meyer, in July 1852 and then, like many other Forty-Eighters, emigrated to the United States.
Revised:  Immigration to America While in London, Schurz married fellow revolutionary Johannes Ronge's sister-in-law, Margarethe Meyer, in July 1852 and then, like many other Forty-Eighters, emigrated to the United States.
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Original:  Emigration to America While in London, Schurz married fellow revolutionary Johannes Ronge's sister-in-law, Margarethe Meyer, in July 1852 and then, like many other Forty-Eighters, emigrated to the United States.
Revised:  Emigration to America While in London, Schurz married fellow revolutionary Johannes Ronge's sister-in-law, Margarethe Meyer, in July 1852 and then, like many other Forty-Eighters, immigrated to the United States.
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Original: File:Stein 1861 Africa Umars Jihad State.jpg|A contemporary German map showing states prior to the rise of Umar Tall, coloured to represent Umar's empire in 1861.
Revised: File:Stein 1861 Africa Umars Jihad State.jpg|A contemporary German map showing states prior to the rise of Omar Tall, coloured to represent Umar's empire in 1861.
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Original: File:Stein 1861 Africa Umars Jihad State.jpg|A contemporary German map showing states prior to the rise of Umar Tall, coloured to represent Umar's empire in 1861.
Revised: File:Stein 1861 Africa Umars Jihad State.jpg|A contemporary German map showing states prior to the rise of Umar Tall, coloured to represent his empire in 1861.
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Original:  History Umar Tall returned from the Hajj in 1836 with the titles of El Hadj and caliph of the Tijaniyya brotherhood of the Sudan.
Revised:  History Omar Tall returned from the Hajj in 1836 with the titles of El Hadj and caliph of the Tijaniyya brotherhood of the Sudan.
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Original:  Abandoning his assault on the French colonial army after an 1857 failure to conquer Medina fort, Umar Tall struck out against the Bamana Empire with much greater success - first Kaarta and then Segou.
Revised:  Abandoning his assault on the French colonial army after an 1857 failure to conquer Medina fort, Omar Tall struck out against the Bamana Empire with much greater success - first Kaarta and then Segou.
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Original:  Umar Tall failed to conquer Timbuktu, and retreated to Deguembéré, near Bandiagara of the Dogon region.
Revised:  Omar Tall failed to conquer Timbuktu, and retreated to Deguembéré, near Bandiagara of the Dogon region.
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