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Original:  Now Japanese Imperial Household has no male member under 20 years old, however the act gives only its male members the chance to rise to the Chrysanthemum Throne.
Revised:  Now Japanese Imperial Household has no male member over the age of 20 years old, however the act gives only its male members the chance to rise to the Chrysanthemum Throne.
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Original:  Now Japanese Imperial Household has no male member under 20 years old, however the act gives only its male members the chance to rise to the Chrysanthemum Throne.
Revised:  Now Japanese Imperial Household has no male member under 20 ; present law only allows male descendants to ascend to the Chrisanthemum Throne.
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Original:  The suggested alternation will bring the possibility to the throne for Princess Aiko, the sole child of Crown Prince Naruhito and Crown Princess Masako , or even Princess Sayako who will leave the Imperial Household due to her planned marriage with a commoner . Also currently the succession can occur only in the male lineage.
Revised:  The proposed solution would put Princess Aiko, the sole child of Crown Prince Naruhito and Crown Princess Masako , or even Princess Sayako who will leave the Imperial Household due to her planned marriage with a commoner . Also currently the succession can occur only in the male lineage.
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Original:  The suggested alternation will bring the possibility to the throne for Princess Aiko, the sole child of Crown Prince Naruhito and Crown Princess Masako , or even Princess Sayako who will leave the Imperial Household due to her planned marriage with a commoner . Also currently the succession can occur only in the male lineage.
Revised:  The suggested alternation will bring the possibility to the throne for Princess Aiko, the sole child of Crown Prince Naruhito and Crown Princess Masako , or even Princess Sayako who will leave the Imperial Household due to her planned marriage with a commoner Also currently the succession can occur only in the male lineage.
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Original:  The advisery board of Koizumi will issue a full report in November, the chair of the board said
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Original:  The proposed solution would put Princess Aiko, the sole child of Crown Prince Naruhito and Crown Princess Masako in place as the most likely to inherit the position of monarch, following behind would be Princess Sayako who will leave the Imperial Household due to her planned marriage with a commoner   
Revised:  The proposed solution would put Princess Aiko, the sole child of Crown Prince Naruhito and Crown Princess Masako in place as the most likely to inherit the position of monarch, following behind would be Princess Sayako who will leave the Imperial Household due to her planned marriage with a commoner . 
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Original:  Implementation of their recommendations would mean that succession to the highest position in Japanest society would occur without a gender bias.
Revised:  Implementation of their recommendations would mean that succession to the highest position in Japanese society would occur without a gender bias.
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Original: At the present time, the Japanese imperial household has no male member over the age of 20;
Revised: At the present time, the Japanese imperial household has no male member under the age of 20;
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Original:  , Manning's legal representative for the upcoming court marshal, said that on Wednesday Manning complained of his clothing restrictions and joked that if he wanted to harm himself with his clothing, he could do so "with the elastic waistband of his underwear or with his flip-flops."
Revised:  , Manning's legal representative for the upcoming court marshal, said that on Wednesday Manning complained of his clothing restrictions and joked that if he wanted to , he might be able to harm himself "with the elastic waistband of his underwear or with his flip-flops."
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Original: Coombs said that Manning was not placed under a suicide watch as that would have required the decision of a mental health professional.
Revised: Coombs said Manning was not placed under a suicide watch as that would have required the decision of a mental health professional.
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Original: Coombs said that Manning was not placed under a suicide watch as that would have required the decision of a mental health professional.
Revised: Coombs said that Manning was not put under a suicide watch as that would have required the decision of a mental health professional.
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Original: Coombs said that Manning was not placed under a suicide watch as that would have required the decision of a mental health professional.
Revised: Coombs said that Manning was not placed under a suicide watch because that would have required the decision of a mental health professional.
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Original: In a statement today , Senator expressed the opinion that recent publicity will cast light on Manning's situation and the balance between humane treatment of detainees and the prevention suicide: "I think that a lot of people are now reviewing this very, very closely, people have weighed in, myself included, I think that analyses are being made. ...
Revised: In a statement , Senator expressed the opinion that recent publicity will cast light on Manning's situation and the balance between humane treatment of detainees and the prevention suicide: "I think that a lot of people are now reviewing this very, very closely, people have weighed in, myself included, I think that analyses are being made. ...
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Original: In a statement, Senator expressed the opinion that recent publicity will cast light on Manning's situation and the balance between humane treatment of detainees and the prevention suicide : "I think that a lot of people are now reviewing this very, very closely, people have weighed in, myself included, I think that analyses are being made. ...
Revised: In a statement, Senator suggested recent publicity will cast light on Manning's situation and the balance between humane treatment of detainees and the prevention suicide : "I think that a lot of people are now reviewing this very, very closely, people have weighed in, myself included, I think that analyses are being made. ...
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Original: In a statement, Senator expressed the opinion that recent publicity will cast light on Manning's situation and the balance between humane treatment of detainees and the prevention suicide : "I think that a lot of people are now reviewing this very, very closely, people have weighed in, myself included, I think that analyses are being made. ...
Revised: In a statement, Senator expressed the opinion that recent publicity will cast light on Manning's situation and the balance between humane treatment and suicide prevention : "I think that a lot of people are now reviewing this very, very closely, people have weighed in, myself included, I think that analyses are being made. ...
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Original: Coombs said Manning was not put under a suicide watch because that would have required the decision of a mental health professional.
Revised: Coombs said Manning was not put under a because that would have required the decision of a mental health professional.
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Original:  Throughout the course of the race there were seven cautions and 22 lead changes among 15 different drivers  
Revised:  Throughout the course of the race there were seven cautions and 22 lead changes among 15 different drivers . 
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Original:  , from the , clinched the sixth position. followed Truex in seventh, while could only manage eighth   
Revised:  , from the , clinched the sixth position. followed Truex in seventh, while could only manage eighth . 
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Original:  The trip is widely believed to have inspired Che to go to Cuba and join Fidel Castro and his 1959 revolt against Cuban dictator Fulgencio Batista.
Revised:  The trip is widely believed to have inspired Che to go to Cuba and join Fidel Castro in his 1959 revolt against Cuban dictator Fulgencio Batista.
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Original: Alberto Jiménez in 2007 Alberto Granado Jiménez, the Argentinian biochemist who was Che Guevara's companion on his formative motorcycle trip through South America, died in Havana on Saturday, reported Cuban state television.
Revised: Alberto Jiménez in 2007 Alberto Granado Jiménez, the Argentinian biochemist who was Che Guevara's companion on his transformative motorcycle trip through South America, died in Havana on Saturday, reported Cuban state television.
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Original:  The politically active Jiménez met Ernesto "Che" Guevara, then a medical student, in Hernando, Argentina where Che had gone to play rugby.
Revised:  The politically active Jiménez met Ernesto "Che" Guevara, then a medical student, in Hernando, Argentina where Guevara had gone to play rugby.
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Original:  In 1951 they set out on an eight-month motorcycle trip through South American that exposed them to the poverty in which most South American's lived.
Revised:  In 1951 they set out on an eight-month motorcycle trip through South American that exposed them to the poverty in which most South Americans lived.
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Original:  They worked in a leprosy colony and met  destitute miners and indigenous people.
Revised:  The pair worked in a leprosy colony and met destitute miners and indigenous people.
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Original:  They worked in a leprosy colony and met  destitute miners and indigenous people.
Revised:  They worked in a leprosy colony and met wtih destitute miners and indigenous people.
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Original: Since sometime France has banned to use of Skype from univerities .
Revised: Since sometime France has banned to use of Skype from universities .
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Original: Since sometime France has banned to use of Skype from universities .
Revised:  France has banned to use of Skype from universities .
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Original: Since sometime France has banned to use of Skype from universities .
Revised: Since sometime France has banned the use of Skype from universities .
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Original: Since sometime France has banned to use of Skype from universities .
Revised: Since sometime France has banned to use of Skype in Universities .
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Original:  The exact reason is unclear, but remarks like state security have been given
Revised:  The exact reason is unclear, but state security was one of the reason given by the authority
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Original:  The exact reason is unclear, but state security was one of the reason given by the authority .
Revised:  The exact reason is unclear, but state security was one of the reasons given by the authority .
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Original:  The exact reason is unclear, but state security was one of the reason given by the authority .
Revised:  The exact reason is unclear, but state security was one of the reason given by the authorities responsible .
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Original:  Several other possible reasons have been cited including fears of research secrets being handed over to the USA . The Skype software uses an encryption algorithm that makes it next to impossible to monitor calls - it is for this reason that Skype is banned throughout China as well   
Revised:  Several other possible reasons have been cited including fears of research secrets being handed over to the USA . The Skype software uses an encryption algorithm that makes it next to impossible to monitor calls - it is for this reason that Skype was banned throughout China as well 
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Original:  Several other possible reasons have been cited including fears of research secrets being handed over to the USA . The Skype software uses an encryption algorithm that makes it next to impossible to monitor calls - it is for this reason that Skype is banned throughout China as well   
Revised:  Several other possible reasons have been cited including fears of research secrets being handed over to the USA . The Skype software uses an encryption algorithm that makes it next to impossible to monitor calls - it is for this reason that Skype is banned throughout China as well . 
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Original: France has banned the use of Skype in Universities.
Revised: France has banned use of the Skype PC telephony application in Universities.
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Original:  Several other possible reasons have been cited including fears of research secrets being handed over to the USA and the fact that in order to make calls to the public phone network you pay a company in Luxembourg and not the local phone company.
Revised:  Several other possible reasons have been cited including fears of research secrets being handed over to the w:United States|United States and the fact that in order to make calls to the public phone network you pay a company in Luxembourg and not the local phone company.
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Original:  Perhaps the authorities in France are fearful that communications they are unable to monitor could be monitored in the states?
Revised:  Some media reports have suggested that French authorities are fearful that communications they are unable to monitor could be monitored in the states?
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Original:  Perhaps the authorities in France are fearful that communications they are unable to monitor could be monitored in the states?
Revised:  Perhaps the authorities in France are fearful that whilst they were unable to monitor could be monitored in the states?
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Original:  However, this version of facts that has spread like wildfire  was promptly refuted by French authorities who called attention to the fact that the ban only applies to university research centers and laboratories, and not to the general student and faculty population.
Revised:  However, this version of facts , which has spread like wildfire was promptly refuted by French authorities who called attention to the fact that the ban only applies to university research centers and laboratories, and not to the general student and faculty population.
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Original:  However, this version of facts that has spread like wildfire  was promptly refuted by French authorities who called attention to the fact that the ban only applies to university research centers and laboratories, and not to the general student and faculty population.
Revised:  However, this version of facts that has spread like wildfire , was promptly refuted by French authorities who called attention to the fact that the ban only applies to university research centers and laboratories, and not to the general student and faculty population.
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Original: The real reasons behind the ban remain a hot point of debate and controversy, although public opinion in France is not sympathetic to Skype's new profile.
Revised: The real reasons behind the ban remains a hot point of debate and controversy, although public opinion in France is not sympathetic to Skype's new profile.
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Original: Map of Israel with Hadera Isreali Police confirmed that a suicide bomber is responsible for a blast that killed 5 people and left many in serious condition.
Revised: Map of Israel with Hadera Israeli Police confirmed that a suicide bomber is responsible for a blast that killed 5 people and left many in serious condition.
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Original: Map of Israel with Hadera Israeli Police confirmed that a suicide bomber is responsible for a blast that killed 5 people and left many in serious condition .
Revised: Map of Israel with Hadera Israeli police confirmed that a suicide bomber is responsible for a blast that killed 5 people and left many in serious condition .
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Original: Map of Israel with Hadera Israeli Police confirmed that a suicide bomber is responsible for a blast that killed 5 people and left many in serious condition .
Revised: Map of Israel with Hadera Israeli Police confirmed that a suicide bomber was responsible for a blast that killed 5 people and left many in serious condition .
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Original: Map of Israel with Hadera Israeli Police confirmed that a suicide bomber is responsible for a blast that killed 5 people and left many in serious condition .
Revised: Map of Israel with Hadera Israeli Police confirmed that a suicide bomber is responsible for a blast that killed five people and left many in serious condition .
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Original:  The Wednesday afternoon attack occurred in an open market place in the small Israeli costal town of Hadera, a location which has been a frequent target of attacks in a 5-year-old Palestinian uprising.
Revised:  The Wednesday afternoon attack occurred in an open market place in the small costal Israeli town of Hadera, a location which has been a frequent target of attacks in a 5-year-old Palestinian uprising.
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Original:  The Wednesday afternoon attack occurred in an open market place in the small Israeli costal town of Hadera, a location which has been a frequent target of attacks in a 5-year-old Palestinian uprising.
Revised:  The Wednesday afternoon attack occurred in an open market place in the small Israeli costal town of Hadera, a location which has been a frequent target of attacks in the five-year-old Palestinian uprising.
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Original:  The market place was busy with shoppers in advance of a Jewish Holiday, with many stocking up for the weekend.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Saeb Erekat, a Palestinian negotiator, denounced the attack and said that he hoped the peace between the two sides would not be damaged.
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Original:  Dr Ra'anan Gissin spokesperson for the Israeli PM, speaking on CNN is refuting claims that this is a revenge attack, claiming "that this is just another terrorist attack in the Palestinians’ plan to rid the Middle East of Israeli."
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Original:  Mahmoud Abbas has stated that the Palestinian Authority would "increase its efforts to ensure the continuation of the truce because it is in the interest of both the Palestinian and the Israeli peoples."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mark Regev, a spokesperson for the Israeli foreign minsitry responded that " Abbas%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% says the right thing...
Revised:  Mahmoud Abbas has stated that the Palestinian Authority would "increase its efforts to ensure the continuation of the truce because it is in the interest of both the Palestinian and the Israeli peoples."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Abbas%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% says the right thing...
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Original:  Mahmoud Abbas has stated that the Palestinian Authority would "increase its efforts to ensure the continuation of the truce because it is in the interest of both the Palestinian and the Israeli peoples."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mark Regev, a spokesperson for the Israeli foreign minsitry responded that " Abbas%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% says the right thing...
Revised:  Mahmoud Abbas has stated that the Palestinian Authority would "increase its efforts to ensure the continuation of the truce because it is in the interest of both the Palestinian and the Israeli peoples."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mark Regev, a spokesperson for the Israeli foreign minsitry responded that " %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% says the right thing...
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Original: Dr Ra'anan Gissin spokesperson for the Israeli PM, speaking on CNN is refuting claims that this is a revenge attack, claiming "that this is just another terrorist attack in the Palestinians ’ plan to rid the Middle East of Israeli."
Revised: Dr Ra'anan Gissin spokesperson for the Israeli PM, speaking on CNN is refuting claims that this is a revenge attack, claiming "that this is just another terrorist attack in the Palestinians ' plan to rid the Middle East of Israeli."
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Original:  The recently elected Iranian President Mahmud Ahmadinedschad called for Israel to be "eradicated from the map" and condoned the recent wave of Palestinian attacks in his speech today during a conference in Teheran titled "The World without Zionism."
Revised:  The recently elected Iranian President Mahmud Ahmadinejad called for Israel to be "eradicated from the map" and condoned the recent wave of Palestinian attacks in his speech today during a conference in Teheran titled "The World without Zionism."
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Original:  She was suspended by Kentucky's McCracken  Public Schools system in 2006 after her career in pornography was made public
Revised:  She was suspended by Kentucky's McCracken County Public Schools system in 2006 after her career in pornography was made public
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Original: Tera Myers, a former actress in pornographic films, has left her position as a science teacher at Parkway North High School in St. Louis  , Missouri after her past was revealed by a student.
Revised: Tera Myers, a former actress in pornographic films, has left her position as a science teacher at Parkway North High School in St. Louis County , Missouri after her past was revealed by a student.
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Original:  She was suspended by Kentucky's McCracken County Public Schools system in 2006 after her career in pornography was made public    ] 
Revised:  She was suspended by Kentucky's McCracken County Public Schools system in 2006 after her career in pornography was made public . ] 
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Original:  This marks the second such controversy involving Myers, also known under the names Tericka Dye and  Rikki Anderson.
Revised:  This marks the second such controversy involving Myers, also known under the names Tericka Dye and the stage name Rikki Anderson.
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Original:  Myers also was the coach of the girls' volleyball at Parkway North High School   
Revised:  Myers also was the coach of the girls' volleyball at Parkway North High School . 
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Original: Myers previously taught at Reidland High School in Paducah, Kentucky, and was suspended in 2006 after a student there discovered her pornographic career as well .
Revised: Myers previously taught at Reidland High School in Paducah, Kentucky, and was suspended in 2006 after a student there discovered her pornographic career .
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Original:  Myers said she became involved in the adult industry after working as an impoverished exotic dancer in Californa
Revised:  Myers said she became involved in the adult industry after working as an impoverished exotic dancer in California
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Original: Yesterday October 25, 2005 the Italian Parlament gave the final approval to the reform of the Italian university (the reform is called "Moratti reform"
Revised: Yesterday October 25, 2005 the Italian Parlament gave the final approval to the reform of the Italian university . The reform is called "Moratti reform"
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Original:  from the name of the Minister of School and University, Letizia Moratti ) . Yesterday, before and at the time of the audiction in Parlament to approv the law (that tecnically is a decrete made by the goverment on the bealf of parlament and then approved by the parlement) the city of Rome was partilly blocked by several manifestation of students, professors and assistants.
Revised:  from the name of the Minister of School and University, Letizia Moratti . Yesterday, before and at the time of the audiction in Parlament to approv the law (that tecnically is a decrete made by the goverment on the bealf of parlament and then approved by the parlement) the city of Rome was partilly blocked by several manifestation of students, professors and assistants.
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