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Original:  Although the latest killing appears to be the work of the same man, Railway Police officials refused to immediately confirm his involvement , saying there were "similarities as well as differences in the modus operandi of the murderer".
Revised:  Although the latest killing appears to be the work of the same man, Railway Police officials are wary of declaring this homocide as the work of the same perpetrator , saying there were "similarities as well as differences in the modus operandi of the murderer".
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Original:  Mumbai Police has set up a 90-man team tasked with nabbing the serial killer, who a senior police official compared to Raman Raghav, who bludgeoned 9 pavement dwellers in their sleep in the 60s
Revised:  Mumbai Police have established a 90-man team tasked with nabbing the serial killer, who a senior police official compared to Raman Raghav, who bludgeoned 9 pavement dwellers in their sleep in the 60s
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Original:  Mumbai Police have established a 90-man team tasked with nabbing the serial killer, who a senior police official compared to Raman Raghav, who bludgeoned 9 pavement dwellers in their sleep in the 60s  
Revised:  Mumbai Police have established a 90-man team tasked with nabbing the serial killer, who a senior police official compared to Raman Raghav, who bludgeoned 9 pavement dwellers in their sleep in the 60s . 
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Original: The serial killer stalking Mumbai's streets claimed another victim last night.
Revised: A serial killer found on Mumbai's streets claimed another victim last night.
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Original:  One of at least five young men murdered by him this month .
Revised:  One of at least five young men murdered .
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Original:  The body of a 20-year-old unidentified man was found in a secluded spot on the railway tracks between Churchgate and Grant Road , his head crushed by a 10 kg stone.
Revised:  The body of a 20-year-old unidentified man was found in a secluded spot on the railway tracks between Churchgate and Grant Road . His head crushed by a 10 kg stone.
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Original:  The killer, suspected to be a man in his late 20s, targets young, male ragpickers in South Mumbai, slaughtering them in the early morning and leaving a beer can at the scene of the crime.
Revised:  The killer, suspected to be a man in his late 20s, targets young, male ragpickers in South Mumbai, killing them in the early morning and leaving a beer can at the scene of the crime.
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Original: A serial killer found on Mumbai's streets killed  another person last night;
Revised: A serial killer on Mumbai's streets killed another person last night;
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Original: A serial killer found on Mumbai's streets killed  another person last night;
Revised: A serial killer found on Mumbai's streets killed yet another person last night;
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Original:  making him one of five young men murdered  .
Revised:  making the latter one of five young men murdered .
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Original:  When included in any occidental language, new words need months, often years, to reach an acceptable level of recognition and bravitude on Google had only, the day before its first occurence on French TV, a mere 110 hits  Bravitude was then already used since 2005  by fans of a quite unknown role-playing game.
Revised:  When included in any occidental language, new words need months, often years, to reach an acceptable level of recognition and bravitude on Google had only, the day before its first occurence on French TV, a mere 110 hits . Bravitude was then already used since 2005 by fans of a quite unknown role-playing game.
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Original:  She said it during a visit to the Chinese Wall, and the term caused a media buzz in France and ironic reactions from Nicolas Sarkozy, who has been nominated by President Chirac's party to succeed him .
Revised:  She said it during a visit to the Chinese Wall, and the term caused a media buzz in France . It also provoked ironic reactions from Nicolas Sarkozy, who has been nominated by President Chirac's party to succeed him .
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Original:  She said it during a visit to the Chinese Wall, and the term caused a media buzz in France and ironic reactions from Nicolas Sarkozy, who has been nominated by President Chirac's party to succeed him .
Revised:  She said it during a visit to the Chinese Wall, and the term caused a media buzz in France and ironic reactions from Nicolas Sarkozy, who has been nominated by President Chirac's party UMP as their candidate for the presidency .
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Original:  According to her entourage, it was meant to express something more than just simple bravery (in French: bravoure), a kind of fullness of bravery.
Revised:  According to Royale's entourage, it was meant to express something more than just simple bravery (in French: bravoure), a kind of fullness of bravery.
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Original: Image:Ségolène Royal speaking crop.jpg|Ségolène Royale on a meeting in Nantes in November 2006.]] You won't find the word "Bravitude" in any French dictionary yet.
Revised: Image:Ségolène Royal speaking crop.jpg|Ségolène Royal on a meeting in Nantes in November 2006.]] You won't find the word "Bravitude" in any French dictionary yet.
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Original:  Bravitude is a neologism used by Ségolène Royale , the French socialist presidential candidate.
Revised:  Bravitude is a neologism used by Ségolène Royal , the French socialist presidential candidate.
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Original:  According to Royale 's entourage, it was meant to express something more than just simple bravery (in French: bravoure), a kind of fullness of bravery.
Revised:  According to Royal 's entourage, it was meant to express something more than just simple bravery (in French: bravoure), a kind of fullness of bravery.
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Original:  External links Video : Ségolène Royale interviewed on the Chinese wal
Revised:  External links Video : Ségolène Royal interviewed on the Chinese wal
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Original:  This neologism has this Monday started a slow decline above 800 ,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them.
Revised:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline above 800 ,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them.
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Original:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline process around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them . Related new
Revised:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline process around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them Related new
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Original:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline process around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them . Related new
Revised:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline process around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them . 
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Original:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline process around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them     
Revised:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline process around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them . 
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Original: Bravitude was then already used since 2005 on some blogs and by fans of a quite unknown role-playing game.
Revised: Bravitude was already used since 2005 on some blogs and by fans of a quite unknown role-playing game.
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Original: Bravitude was then already used since 2005 on some blogs and by fans of a quite unknown role-playing game.
Revised: Bravitude was then already used since 2005 on some blogs and by fans of a relatively unknown role-playing game.
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Original:  On Tuesday last week, bravitude could be found in 200,000 different pages and in less than one week, had reached the one million mark.
Revised:  On Tuesday last week, "bravitude" could be found in 200,000 different pages and in less than one week, had reached the one million mark.
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Original:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline process around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them.
Revised:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline , around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them.
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Original:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline process around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages while Google robots scan them.
Revised:  This neologism is this Tuesday in a slow decline process around 900,000 hits on Google, probably due to those web sites who hide their oldest pages when Google robots scan them.
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Original: Western Australian government authorities  believe a toxin may be responsible for the recent mystery deaths of some 5000 birds around Esperance in the state's south eastern coastline.
Revised: Western Australian government authorities say they believe a toxin may be responsible for the recent mystery deaths of some 5000 birds around Esperance in the state's south eastern coastline.
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Original:  Esperance residents first noticed large numbers of dead birds littering their streets and gardens in early December .  ] Mike Fitzgerald said the DEC were looking at something "pretty potent ," he told local news media ."  This is not a normal situation.
Revised:  Esperance residents first noticed large numbers of dead birds littering their streets and gardens in early December . Birds Australia] Mike Fitzgerald said the DEC were looking at something "pretty potent ," he told local news media ." This is not a normal situation.
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Original:  Esperance residents first noticed large numbers of dead birds littering their streets and gardens in early December .  ] Mike Fitzgerald said the DEC were looking at something "pretty potent ," he told local news media ."  This is not a normal situation.
Revised:  Esperance residents first noticed large numbers of dead birds littering their streets and gardens in early December . ] Mike Fitzgerald said the DEC were looking at something "pretty potent ." This is not a normal situation.
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Original:  Esperance residents first noticed large numbers of dead birds littering their streets and gardens in early December .  ] Mike Fitzgerald said the DEC were looking at something "pretty potent ," he told local news media ."  This is not a normal situation.
Revised:  Esperance residents first noticed large numbers of dead birds littering their streets and gardens in early December . ] Mike Fitzgerald said the DEC were looking at something "pretty potent ," he told local news media ." " This is not a normal situation.
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Original:  " Mr Fitzgerald said the deaths could be a result of a drier than normal winter, which had caused algal and bacterial blooms in the Esperance Lakes Nature Reserves.
Revised:  " The deaths could be a result of a drier than normal winter, which had caused algal and bacterial blooms in the Esperance Lakes Nature Reserves.
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Original:  " Mr Fitzgerald said the deaths could be a result of a drier than normal winter, which had caused algal and bacterial blooms in the Esperance Lakes Nature Reserves.
Revised:  " Mr Fitzgerald said the deaths could be a result of a drier than normal winter, causing algal and bacterial blooms in the Esperance Lakes Nature Reserves.
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Original:  The first deaths were reported by Esperance resident Michelle Crisp , whose property is close to bush in the worst-affected area.
Revised:  The first deaths were reported by Esperance resident Michelle Crisp - who lives close to the worst-affected area.
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Original:  She began ringing around neighbours and was shocked to find they were experiencing the same thing.
Revised:  She says she contacted neighbours to discover they were experiencing the same thing.
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Original: Birds Australia , the peak group dedicated to the conservation, study and enjoyment of Australia's native birds and their habitats, said it had not heard of a similar occurrence.
Revised: Birds Australia , the peak group dedicated to the conservation, study and enjoyment of Australia's native birds and their habitats, said it had not heard of a similar occurrence.
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Original: The birds were been found vomiting and convulsing in bushland and suburban backyards over an extensive area.
Revised: The birds were being found vomiting and convulsing in bushland and suburban backyards over an extensive area.
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Original:  She says she contacted neighbours to discover  they were experiencing the same thing.
Revised:  She says she contacted neighbours to discover if they were experiencing the same thing.
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Original:  One of the species affected by the recent mystery deaths of 5000 birds in Esperance, WA Western Australian government authorities say they believe a toxin may be responsible for the recent mystery deaths of an estimated 5,000 dead birds found around Esperance - on the state's south eastern coastline.
Revised:  One of the species affected by the recent mystery deaths of 5000 birds in Esperance, WA Western Australian government authorities say they believe a toxin may be responsible for the recent mysterious death of an estimated 5,000 dead birds found around Esperance - on the state's south eastern coastline.
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Original:  An autopsy being carried out by toxicologists from the WA Department of Agriculture will test for organochlorins, organophosphates and heavy metals.
Revised:  Autopsies by toxicologists from the WA Department of Agriculture will test for organochlorins, organophosphates and heavy metals.
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Original:  The DEC says it has failed to figure out the cause of death despite interviewing industry groups, farmers, grain handlers and timber companies about pesticide and chemical use.
Revised:  The 
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Original:  Esperance recorded 457mm rainfall in 2006 out of an average of 620mm.
Revised:  Esperance recorded 457mm rainfall in 2006 ; the average is 620mm.
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Original:  The Commerce Commission said that the complaints reflect that the entrants do not know about the subscription, even though the advertisments briefly state in fine print that the competition is a subscription competition, how much a received text costs, etc at the bottom of the ad.
Revised:  The Commerce Commission said that the complaints reflect that the entrants do not know about the subscription, even though the advertisements briefly state in fine print that the competition is a subscription competition, how much a received text costs, etc at the bottom of the ad.
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Original:  A part of the older trackway No. II dating to the period of the Roman Empire is on display at the permanent exhibition of the Archaeological Museum Hamburg in Harburg  , Hamburg.
Revised:  A part of the older trackway No. II dating to the period of the Roman Empire is on display at the permanent exhibition of the Archaeological Museum Hamburg in Harburg borough , Hamburg.
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Original: Imperial War Museum In the United States [[File:Ocean City MD Boardwalk August 2009 1.jpg|The boardwalk in Ocean City, Maryland, a wooden pathway adjacent to the beach that is lined with businesses, typical of boardwalks along the East Coast of the United States.
Revised: Imperial War Museum [[File:Ocean City MD Boardwalk August 2009 1.jpg|The boardwalk in Ocean City, Maryland, a wooden pathway adjacent to the beach that is lined with businesses, typical of boardwalks along the East Coast of the United States.
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Original: Life and career Anderson was born in New York  , the son of Myra (Grigg) and James Hewston Anderson, a self-made URL He was educated at Phillips Exeter Academy, which he later said he found a lonely experience.
Revised: Life and career Anderson was born in New York City , the son of Myra (Grigg) and James Hewston Anderson, a self-made URL He was educated at Phillips Exeter Academy, which he later said he found a lonely experience.
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Original:  The Shock of Recognition The Footsteps of Doves I'll Be Home for Christmas I Never Sang for My Father (1968) - writer Solitaire/ Double Solitaire (1970) - writer The Last Act Is a Solo (1991) - writer
Revised:  The Shock of Recognition The Footsteps of Doves I'll Be Home for Christmas I Never Sang for My Father (1968) - writer Double Solitaire (1970) - writer The Last Act Is a Solo (1991) - writer
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Original: 2009 deaths Category:20th-century American dramatists and playwrights Category:American male screenwriters Category:Harvard University alumni Category:Deaths from pneumonia Category: People from Manhattan Category:Infectious disease deaths in New York (state) Category:American male dramatists and playwrights Category:20th-century American male writers Category:Screenwriters from New York (state) Category:20th-century American screenwriters Category:People with Alzheimer's disea
Revised: 2009 deaths Category:20th-century American dramatists and playwrights Category:American male screenwriters Category:Harvard University alumni Category:Deaths from pneumonia Category: Writers from Manhattan Category:Infectious disease deaths in New York (state) Category:American male dramatists and playwrights Category:20th-century American male writers Category:Screenwriters from New York (state) Category:20th-century American screenwriters Category:People with Alzheimer's disea
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Original: 2009 deaths Category:20th-century American dramatists and playwrights Category:American male screenwriters Category:Harvard University alumni Category:Deaths from pneumonia Category:Writers from Manhattan Category:Infectious disease deaths in New York (state)  Category:American male dramatists and playwrights Category:20th-century American male writers Category:Screenwriters from New York (state) Category:20th-century American screenwriters Category:People with Alzheimer's disea
Revised: 2009 deaths Category:20th-century American dramatists and playwrights Category:American male screenwriters Category:Harvard University alumni Category:Deaths from pneumonia in New York (state) Category:American male dramatists and playwrights Category:20th-century American male writers Category:Screenwriters from New York (state) Category:20th-century American screenwriters Category:People with Alzheimer's disea
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Original: 2009 deaths Category:20th-century American dramatists and playwrights Category:American male screenwriters Category:Harvard University alumni Category:Deaths from pneumonia Category:Writers from Manhattan Category:Infectious disease deaths in New York (state)  Category:American male dramatists and playwrights Category:20th-century American male writers Category:Screenwriters from New York (state) Category:20th-century American screenwriters Category:People with Alzheimer's disea
Revised: 2009 deaths Category:20th-century American dramatists and playwrights Category:American male screenwriters Category:Harvard University alumni Category:Deaths from pneumonia Category:Writers from Manhattan Category:Infectious disease deaths in New York (state) Category:Writers from Manhattan Category:American male dramatists and playwrights Category:20th-century American male writers Category:Screenwriters from New York (state) Category:20th-century American screenwriters Category:People with Alzheimer's disea
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Original: `Alimqul (also spelt Alimkul , Alim quli, Alim kuli) (ca. 1833 – 1865) was a warlord in the Kokand Khanate, and its de facto ruler from 1863 to 1865.
Revised: `Alimqul (also spelt Alymkul , Alim quli, Alim kuli) (ca. 1833 – 1865) was a warlord in the Kokand Khanate, and its de facto ruler from 1863 to 1865.
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Original:  Not being of royal blood himself, Alimqul elevated Malla Beg's minor son, Sultan Sayyid Khan as a titulary khan, and ruled the country himself as "Atalyk" ( Atalyk Atabek) and commander in chief of the military (Amir-i Lashkar).
Revised:  Not being of royal blood himself, Alimqul elevated Malla Beg's minor son, Sultan Sayyid Khan as a titulary khan, and ruled the country himself as "Atalyk" ( Atabek) and commander in chief of the military (Amir-i Lashkar).
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Original:  Not being of royal blood himself, Alimqul elevated Malla Beg's minor son, Sultan Sayyid Khan as a titulary khan, and ruled the country himself as "Atalyk " (Atabek) and commander in chief of the military (Amir-i Lashkar).
Revised:  Not being of royal blood himself, Alimqul elevated Malla Beg's minor son, Sultan Sayyid Khan as a titulary khan, and ruled the country himself as Atalyk and commander in chief of the military (Amir-i Lashkar).
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Original: Alimqul was born in Budjun Batken . 1833, into a family of a Kyrgyz-Kipchak beys.
Revised: Alimqul was born in Budjun Batken , 1833, into a family of a Kyrgyz-Kipchak beys.
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Original:  In Netflix's, "Ninja Assassin," the antagonist is 'Master Ozunu;' whom heads the, "9 Clan".
Revised:  In Netflix's, "Ninja Assassin," the antagonist is 'Master Ozunu;' who heads the, "9 Clan".
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Original:  In Netflix's, "Ninja Assassin," the antagonist is 'Master Ozunu;' who heads the, "9 Clan".
Revised:  In the movie "Ninja Assassin," the antagonist is 'Master Ozunu;' who heads the, "9 Clan".
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Original:  Not only did Gallup get the election right, he correctly predicted the results of the Literary Digest poll  as well using a random sample smaller than theirs but chosen to match it.
Revised:  Not only did Gallup get the election right, he correctly predicted the results of the Literary Digest poll , as well using a random sample smaller than theirs but chosen to match it.
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Original: Twelve years later, his organization had its moment of greatest ignominy, when it predicted that Thomas Dewey would defeat Harry S. Truman in the 1948 election, by between 5  and 15\%;
Revised: Twelve years later, his organization had its moment of greatest ignominy, when it predicted that Thomas Dewey would defeat Harry S. Truman in the 1948 election, by between 5 \% and 15\%;
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Original:  Gallup believed the error was mostly due to ending his polling three weeks before Election Day, thus failing to account for Truman's comeback.
Revised:  Gallup believed the error was mostly due to his decision to end polling three weeks before Election Day, thus failing to account for Truman's comeback.
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Original: Life and career 235px|George Gallup on a 2001 Romania stamp Grave in Princeton Cemetery Gallup was born in Jefferson, Iowa, the son of Nettie Quella (Davenport) and George Henry Gallup, a dairy farmer.
Revised: Life and career 235px|George Gallup on a 2001 Romanian stamp Grave in Princeton Cemetery Gallup was born in Jefferson, Iowa, the son of Nettie Quella (Davenport) and George Henry Gallup, a dairy farmer.
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Original:  The next year, he moved to New York City to join the advertising agency of Young and Rubicam as director of research (later  as vice president from 1937 to 1947).
Revised:  The next year, he moved to New York City to join the advertising agency of Young and Rubicam as director of research (later serving as vice president from 1937 to 1947).
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