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Original:  Privacy including data protection is also protected by Article 8 of the European Convention on Human Rights .
Revised:  Privacy including data protection is also protected by .
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Original:  The day was initiated by the Council of Europe to be first held in 2007 as the European Data Protection Day.
Revised:  The day was initiated by the to be first held in 2007 as the European Data Protection Day.
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Original:  Two years later, on January 26, 2009, the United States House of Representatives passed House Resolution HR 31 by a vote of 402–0, declaring January 28 National Data Privacy Day.
Revised:  Two years later, on January 26, 2009, the United States passed House Resolution HR 31 by a vote of 402–0, declaring January 28 National Data Privacy Day.
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Original:  H.Res.31 Expressing support for the designation of January 28, 2009 as "National Data Privacy Day" On January 28, 2009, the Senate passed Senate Resolution 25 also recognizing January 28, 2009 as National Data Privacy Day.
Revised:  On January 28, 2009, the Senate passed Senate Resolution 25 also recognizing January 28, 2009 as National Data Privacy Day.
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Original:  The United States Senate also recognized Data Privacy Day in 2010 and 2011.
Revised:  The also recognized Data Privacy Day in 2010 and 2011.
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Original:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
Revised:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, , Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
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Original:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
Revised:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, , (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
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Original:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
Revised:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
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Original:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
Revised:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
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Original:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
Revised:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
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Original:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and Data Security Council of India
Revised:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University, CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada , New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner., and 
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Original: Data Privacy Day (known in Europe as Data Protection Day) is an  that occurs every year on 28th January.
Revised: Data Privacy Day (known in Europe as Data Protection Day) is an international event that occurs every year on 28th January.
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Original:  It is currently observed in the , , and . Data Privacy Day's educational initiative originally focused on  among businesses as well as users about the importance of protecting the privacy of their personal information online, particularly in the context of  .
Revised:  It is currently observed in the , , and . Data Privacy Day's educational initiative originally focused on raising awareness among businesses as well as users about the importance of protecting the privacy of their personal information online, particularly in the context of .
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Original:  It is currently observed in the , , and . Data Privacy Day's educational initiative originally focused on  among businesses as well as users about the importance of protecting the privacy of their personal information online, particularly in the context of  .
Revised:  It is currently observed in the , , and . Data Privacy Day's educational initiative originally focused on among businesses as well as users about the importance of protecting the privacy of their personal information online, particularly in the context of social networking .
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Original:  Two years later, on January 26, 2009, the United States  passed House Resolution HR 31 by a vote of 402–0, declaring January 28 National Data Privacy Day.
Revised:  Two years later, on January 26, 2009, the United States House of Representatives passed House Resolution HR 31 by a vote of 402–0, declaring January 28 National Data Privacy Day.
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Original:  The educational focus has expanded over the past four years to include families, consumers and businesses.
Revised:  The educational focus has expanded over the years to include families, consumers and businesses.
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Original:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University,CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada, New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner . , and Data Security Council of India
Revised:  Anti-Phishing Working Group, Carnegie Mellon University,CMU Privacy Day website Cyber Data-Risk Managers, EDUCAUSE, Georgetown University, Federal Trade Commission (FTC), Federal Communications Commission (FCC), Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI), Identity Theft Council, the Privacy Commissioner of Canada, New York State Attorney General Office, the UK Information Commissioner , and Data Security Council of India
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Original:  Matthies first saw action at the battle of Island Number Ten.
Revised:  Matthies first saw action at the Battle of Island Number Ten.
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Original:  During the winter of 1862-63 he was in command of a brigade in the Army of the Tennessee.
Revised:  During the winter of 1862-1863 he was in command of a brigade in the Army of the Tennessee.
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Original:  General Matthies led this brigade during the Vicksburg Campaign, fighting at the Battle of Jackson and in the assaults on Vicksburg.
Revised:  Matthies led this brigade during the Vicksburg Campaign, fighting at the Battle of Jackson and in the assaults on Vicksburg.
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Original: Still, despite the limitations, the NNV can serve as a useful resource.
Revised: Significance Despite the limitations, the NNV can serve as a useful resource.
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Original: In   order to determine a NNV, it is necessary to identify a specific population and a defined endpoint, because these can vary: Tuberculosis vaccination rates are much higher in Europe than in the United States.
Revised: In Significance In order to determine a NNV, it is necessary to identify a specific population and a defined endpoint, because these can vary: Tuberculosis vaccination rates are much higher in Europe than in the United States.
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Original:  For example, one study reported a number needed to vaccinate of 5206 for invasive pneumococcal disease.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Significance Despite the limitations, the NNV can serve as a useful resource.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Despite the limitations, the NNV can serve as a useful resource.
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Original:  Before Malik was married  in 1977 , Christian singer Reynold Panggabean.
Revised:  Malik was married in 1977 , Christian singer Reynold Panggabean.
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Original:  Before Malik was married  in 1977 , Christian singer Reynold Panggabean.
Revised:  Before Malik was married previously in 1977 , Christian singer Reynold Panggabean.
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Original:  Before Malik was married  in 1977 , Christian singer Reynold Panggabean.
Revised:  Before Malik was married in 1977 to Christian singer Reynold Panggabean.
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Original: Progressive Contextualization is a scientific method pioneered and developed by Professor Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979-1984.
Revised: Progressive contextualization (PC) is a scientific method pioneered and developed by Professor Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979-1984.
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Original: Progressive Contextualization is a scientific method pioneered and developed by Professor Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979-1984.
Revised: Progressive Contextualization is a scientific method pioneered and developed by professor Andrew Peter Vayda and research team between 1979-1984.
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Original: Progressive Contextualization is a scientific method pioneered and developed by Professor Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979-1984.
Revised: Progressive Contextualization is a scientific method pioneered and developed by Professor Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979 and 1984.
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Original:  The method was developed to help understand cause of damage and destruction of forest and land during the New Order Regime in Indonesia  as well as practical ethnography.
Revised:  The method was developed to help understand cause of damage and destruction of forest and land during the New Order Regime in Indonesia , as well as practical ethnography.
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Original:  Vayda proposed the Progressive Contextualization (PC) method due to his dissatisfaction with several conventional anthropological methods to describe accurately and quickly cases of illegal logging, land destruction and the network of actor-investor protecting the actions, as well as various consequences detrimental to the environment and social life.
Revised:  Vayda proposed the Progressive contextualization method due to his dissatisfaction with several conventional anthropological methods to describe accurately and quickly cases of illegal logging, land destruction and the network of actor-investor protecting the actions, as well as various consequences detrimental to the environment and social life.
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Original:  Category:1979 Category:1984 Category: Ecolo
Revised:  Category:1979 Category:1984 Category: Ecology Category:Methodolo
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Original: Progressive contextualization (PC) is a scientific method pioneered and developed by professor Andrew Peter Vayda and research team between 1979 and 1984.
Revised: Progressive contextualization (PC) is a scientific method pioneered and developed by professor Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979 and 1984.
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Original: The essence of this method is to track and assess: what the actor does (actor-based) or network of certain actors (actor-based network) in military business practices in certain location and time series of consequences that are intended and unintended from what the actors or their networks do, in a time and space that can be different from the original time and space, as long as it is in accordance with the interest of the research and the available time.
Revised: The essence of this method is to track and assess: what the actor does (actor-based) or network of certain actors (actor-based network) in certain location and time series of consequences that are intended and unintended from what the actors or their networks do, in a time and space that can be different from the original time and space, as long as it is in accordance with the interest of the research and the available time.
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Original: Progressive contextualization (PC) is a scientific method pioneered and developed by professor Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979 and 1984.
Revised: Progressive contextualization (PC) is a scientific method pioneered and developed by professor Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979 and URL
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Original:  Based on such a premise and through the practical interpretation of facts, the approach will lead to 'concrete findings on who is doing what, why they are doing it, and with what effects.' 
Revised:  Based on such a premise and through the practical interpretation of facts, the approach will lead to 'concrete findings on who is doing what, why they are doing it, and with what effects.' References
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Original: Progressive contextualization (PC) is a scientific method pioneered and developed by professor Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979 and URL The method was developed to help understand cause of damage and destruction of forest and land during the New Order Regime in Indonesia, as well as practical ethnography.
Revised: Progressive contextualization (PC) is a scientific method pioneered and developed by Andrew P. Vayda and research team between 1979 and URL The method was developed to help understand cause of damage and destruction of forest and land during the New Order Regime in Indonesia, as well as practical ethnography.
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Original:  Falleció el General de División Efigenio Ameijeiras Delgado A self-declared anti-communist, he was one of the band of Castro's active guerrillas that became known as the 26th of July Movement, named after the raid on Moncada Barracks on 26 July 1953, though he is not mentioned as one of the participants.
Revised:  A self-declared anti-communist, he was one of the band of Castro's active guerrillas that became known as the 26th of July Movement, named after the raid on Moncada Barracks on 26 July 1953, though he is not mentioned as one of the participants.
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Original:  There, he searched out the ancient Vedic scriptures and instantly became driven to explore the depths of spirituality, discovering the richness of India's spiritual heritage . Career Becoming engrossed in the depths of a book which he obtained called The Nectar of Devotion written by Srila Prabhupada, he realized that he had found his spiritual master and the path for which he was searching.
Revised:  There, he searched out the ancient Vedic scriptures . Career Becoming engrossed in the depths of a book which he obtained called The Nectar of Devotion written by Srila Prabhupada, he realized that he had found his spiritual master and the path for which he was searching.
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Original:  There, he searched out the ancient Vedic scriptures and instantly became driven to explore the depths of spirituality, discovering the richness of India's spiritual heritage . Career Becoming engrossed in the depths of a book which he obtained called The Nectar of Devotion written by Srila Prabhupada, he realized that he had found his spiritual master and the path for which he was searching.
Revised:  There, he searched out the ancient Vedic scriptures and instantly became driven to explore the depths of spirituality, discovering the richness of India's spiritual heritage . Career After reading The Nectar of Devotion written by Srila Prabhupada, he realized that he had found his spiritual master and the path for which he was searching.
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Original:  His first meeting with Srila Prabhupada finally took place in January 1977 during the Maha Kumbha Mela at Prayagraj.
Revised:  His first meeting with Srila Prabhupada took place in January 1977 during the Maha Kumbha Mela at Prayagraj.
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Original:  On his first meeting only, Srila Prabhupada gave him the following instructions: to translate all of his books into Bengali and become his Secretary for Indian Affairs.
Revised:  Prabhupada instructed him to translate all of his books into Bengali and become his Secretary for Indian Affairs.
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Original:  Shortly after, during the Snana Yatra festival in Vrindavan, Srila Prabhupada awarded him the renounced order of sannyasa.
Revised:  Shortly after, during the Snana Yatra festival in Vrindavan, Prabhupada awarded him the renounced order of sannyasa.
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Original:  He later then served as the GBC (Governing Body Commissioner) Chairman in 1989 and later in 2017.
Revised:  He later became the GBC (Governing Body Commissioner) Chairman in 1989 and later in 2017.
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Original:  Thereafter, he was involved in creating, writing, producing, and directing the epic biographical and well-known video series, Abhay Charan.
Revised:  Thereafter, he was involved in writing, producing, and directing the epic biographical and well-known video series, Abhay Charan.
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Original:  Thereafter, he was involved in creating, writing, producing, and directing the epic biographical and well-known video series, Abhay Charan.
Revised:  Thereafter, he was involved in creating, writing, producing, and directing the biographical video series, Abhay Charan.
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Original:  With over 100 episodes and broadcast on Indian National Television, reaching more than 4 million viewers in a short span of few months, the series is beautiful and chronologically portrays Srila Prabhupada's whole life and achievements.
Revised:  With over 100 episodes and broadcast on Indian National Television, reaching more than 4 million viewers in a short span of few months, the series chronologically portrays Srila Prabhupada's whole life and achievements.
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Original:  This is the place where Lord Sri Krishna, along with His brother Balarama and friend Sudama received their education from Maharishi Sandipani.
Revised:  This is the place where Lord Sri Krishna, along with his brother Balarama and friend Sudama received their education from Maharishi Sandipani.
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Original:  Under Maharaj's leadership there, an extraordinary marble temple was inaugurated in less than 10 months in February 2006.
Revised:  Under Maharaj's leadership , an marble temple was inaugurated in less than 10 months in February 2006.
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Original:  He has also established a department in Ujjain which produces exquisitely decorated altars, murtis and deity dresses for devotees and ISKCON temples all over the world.
Revised:  He has also established a department in Ujjain which produces decorated altars, murtis and deity dresses for devotees and ISKCON temples all over the world.
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Original:  In 2013, he pioneered the development of a new ISKCON temple in Panihati (West Bengal) – a very holy place in the Gaudiya Vaishnava tradition, the home of Raghava Pandit and the place of Lord Nityananda's Chipped Rice (Chida Dahi) Festival.
Revised:  In 2013, he oversaw the development of a new ISKCON temple in Panihati (West Bengal) – a very holy place in the Gaudiya Vaishnava tradition, the home of Raghava Pandit and the place of Lord Nityananda's Chipped Rice (Chida Dahi) Festival.
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Original:  In 2013, he pioneered the development of a new ISKCON temple in Panihati (West Bengal) – a very holy place in the Gaudiya Vaishnava tradition, the home of Raghava Pandit and the place of Lord Nityananda's Chipped Rice (Chida Dahi) Festival.
Revised:  In 2013, he pioneered the development of a new ISKCON temple in Panihati (West Bengal) – a holy place in the Gaudiya Vaishnava tradition, the home of Raghava Pandit and the place of Lord Nityananda's Chipped Rice (Chida Dahi) Festival.
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Original:  In 2014, he established Arogya Niketan, a traditional and authentic Ayurvedic health clinic in Ujjain.
Revised:  In 2014, he established Arogya Niketan, a traditional Ayurvedic health clinic in Ujjain.
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Original:  In the same year, he joined Artha Forum and began delivering keynote speeches globally on spirituality to large audiences of business leaders.
Revised:  In the same year, he joined Artha Forum and began delivering keynote speeches globally on spirituality to business leaders.
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Original:  He has founded and established I-Foundation, a leading Hindu charity organisation in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  He has founded and established I-Foundation, a Hindu charity organisation in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  In 2016, Bhakti Charu Swami launched a beautiful memoir, "Ocean of Mercy – A Search Fulfilled", where he recollects his intimate interactions with Srila Prabhupada.
Revised:  In 2016, Bhakti Charu Swami wrote a memoir, "Ocean of Mercy – A Search Fulfilled", where he recollects his intimate interactions with Srila Prabhupada.
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