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Original: Image:Hpbuilding-edit.png|The HP Building of Israel Hewlett-Packard (HP), a global technology leader with major businesses operations in computer hardware, software, printing and services announced today that they will aquire Electronic Data Systems (EDS) for US$13.9 billion in an all cash deal.
Revised:  Hewlett-Packard (HP), a global technology leader with major businesses operations in computer hardware, software, printing and services announced today that they will aquire Electronic Data Systems (EDS) for US$13.9 billion in an all cash deal.
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Original: Image:Hpwelcomesign.jpg|The HP welcome sign at HP's headquarters in California Hewlett-Packard (HP), a global technology leader with major businesses operations in computer hardware, software, printing and services announced today that they will aquire Electronic Data Systems (EDS) for US $13.9 billion in an all cash deal.
Revised:  Hewlett-Packard (HP), a global technology leader with major businesses operations in computer hardware, software, printing and services announced today that they will aquire Electronic Data Systems (EDS) for US $13.9 billion in an all cash deal.
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Original:  "We wouldn't do the deal if we didn't think we had an opportunity to improve the operating profit level that EDS currently has.   
Revised:  "We wouldn't do the deal if we didn't think we had an opportunity to improve the operating profit level that EDS currently has. " 
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Original: Shortly before midnight on the 13th, police intercepted a car on Clarendon St in South Melbourne  .
Revised: Shortly before midnight on the 13th, police intercepted a car on Clarendon Street in South Melbourne .
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Original: Shortly before midnight on the 13th, police intercepted a car on Clarendon St in South Melbourne  .
Revised: Shortly before midnight on the 13th, police intercepted a car on Clarendon St in South Melbourne , Australia .
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Original:  The police member was taken to the  Alfred Hospital in a stable condition with minor injuries
Revised:  The police member was taken to the The Alfred Hospital in a stable condition with minor injuries
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Original: A bomb car blasted today at 0300 (0100 GMT) in the Basque town of Legutiano, near the barracks of the spanish paramilitary police Guardia Civil.
Revised: A bomb car blasted today at 0300 (0100 GMT) in the Basque town of Legutiano, near the barracks of the Spanish paramilitary police Guardia Civil.
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Original:  The barracs and a nearly abandoned building are practically collapsed.
Revised:  The barracks and a nearly abandoned building are practically collapsed.
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Original:  The power of the explosion has also made a great hole and damaged buildings 500 meters far . According to authorities, the bomb van may had contained more than 300 kg of explosives.
Revised:  The force of the explosion has also made a great hole and damaged buildings 500 meters far . According to authorities, the bomb van may had contained more than 300 kg of explosives.
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Original:  The power of the explosion has also made a great hole and damaged buildings 500 meters far . According to authorities, the bomb van may had contained more than 300 kg of explosives.
Revised:  The power of the explosion has also made a large hole and damaged buildings 500 meters far . According to authorities, the bomb van may had contained more than 300 kg of explosives.
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Original:  The power of the explosion has also made a great hole and damaged buildings 500 meters far . According to authorities, the bomb van may had contained more than 300 kg of explosives.
Revised:  The power of the explosion has also made a great hole and damaged buildings 500 meters away . According to authorities, the bomb van may had contained more than 300 kg of explosives.
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Original:  The power of the explosion has also made a great hole and damaged buildings 500 meters far . According to authorities, the bomb van may had contained more than 300 kg of explosives.
Revised:  The power of the explosion has also made a great hole and damaged buildings 500 meters far . According to authorities, the bomb van may have contained more than 300 kg of explosives.
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Original:  The Basque separatist group ETA was blamed  this attack by authorities.
Revised:  The Basque separatist group ETA was blamed for this attack by authorities.
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Original:  This is the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago (they killed a town councillor in the final day of official campaigning ), although they have commited many bomb attacks lately (the last three days ago) 
Revised:  This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago (they killed a town councillor in the final day of official campaigning ), although they have commited many bomb attacks lately (the last three days ago) 
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Original:  This is the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago (they killed a town councillor in the final day of official campaigning ), although they have commited many bomb attacks lately (the last three days ago) 
Revised:  This is the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago (they killed a town councillor in the final day of official campaigning . 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago, when Isaías Carrasco was killed on the final day of official campaigning.
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Original:  However, emergency response is being made difficult by continueing poor weather and landslides tat have cut off Wenchuan county.
Revised:  However, emergency response is being made difficult by continueing poor weather and landslides that have cut off Wenchuan county.
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Original:  In Mianyang alone, one of the worst-hit cities, some 19,000 people are thought to be buried under rubble and the first rescuers to reach the epicenter state tens of thoudsands may be dead there as well.
Revised:  In Mianyang alone, one of the worst-hit cities, some 19,000 people are thought to be buried under rubble and the first rescuers to reach the epicenter state tens of thousands may be dead there as well.
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Original:  It is feared  the toll will rise much further as 60,000 people are missing after the 7.9 magnitude quake in Sichuan let entire towns "razed to the ground" with no buildings standing, according to officials in the area.
Revised:  It is feared that the the toll will rise much further as 60,000 people are missing after the 7.9 magnitude quake in Sichuan let entire towns "razed to the ground" with no buildings standing, according to officials in the area.
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Original:  It is feared the toll will rise much further as 60,000 people are missing after the 7.9 magnitude quake in Sichuan let entire towns "razed to the ground" with no buildings standing, according to officials in the area.
Revised:  It is feared the toll will rise much further as 60,000 people are missing after the 7.9 magnitude quake in Sichuan left entire towns "razed to the ground" with no buildings standing, according to officials in the area.
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Original:  A second school at Wudu (China) , twenty miles from the epicentre behind the White Cloud Mountain, has 130 dead children and 150 more still buried and feared dead.
Revised:  A second school at Wudu , twenty miles from the epicentre behind the White Cloud Mountain, has 130 dead children and 150 more still buried and feared dead.
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Original:   Carl Pope, director of the environmentalist Sierra Club, criticized the Interior Department's decision, saying it was "riddled with loopholes, caveats and backhanded language that could actually undermine protections for the polar bear and other species"   .
Revised:  Carl Pope, director of the environmentalist Sierra Club, criticized the Interior Department's decision, saying it was "riddled with loopholes, caveats and backhanded language that could actually undermine protections for the polar bear and other species" . .
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Original: However, the Government of Nunavut fears the decision could lead to a ban on the importation of polar bear hides into the United States.
Revised: The Government of Nunavut fears the decision could lead to a ban on the importation of polar bear hides into the United States.
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Original:  Kempthorne said the stipulations "will ensure the protection of the bear while allowing us to continue to develop our natural resources in the Arctic region in an environmentally sound way."
Revised:  Kempthorne said the policies "will ensure the protection of the bear while allowing us to continue to develop our natural resources in the Arctic region in an environmentally sound way."
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Original:  The polar bear hunt generates $1.5 million per year .
Revised:  The polar bear hunt generates $1.5 million (US) per year in revenue .
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Original:  According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC), a division of the Department of Health and Human Services, though there is no specific treatment, symptomatic treatment can be given to address possible fever and aches and pains.
Revised:  According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC), a division of the Department of Health and Human Services, symptomatic treatment can be given to address possible fever and aches and pains.
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Original: Over 40 children have died in an outbreak of Hand , foot and mouth disease (HFMD) in China, and the country's capital of Beijing reported its first death due to the disease on Wednesday.
Revised: Over 40 children have died in an outbreak of hand , foot and mouth disease (HFMD) in China, and the country's capital of Beijing reported its first death due to the disease on Wednesday.
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Original:  According to Xinhua News Agency, Beijing Health Bureau spokeswoman Deng Xiaohong said that the 13-month-old boy died Sunday while enroute to the hospital.
Revised:  According to Xinhua News Agency, Beijing Health Bureau spokeswoman Deng Xiaohong said that the 13-month-old boy died Sunday while en route to the hospital.
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Original:  The disease is unrelated to Foot-and-mouth disease, which affects livestock.
Revised:  The disease is unrelated to foot-and-mouth disease, which affects livestock.
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Original: [[Image:Hand Foot Mouth Disease.png|Lesions caused by the Hand, Foot and Mouth Virus on a 11 month old male.
Revised: [[Image:Hand Foot Mouth Disease.png|Lesions caused by the hand, foot and mouth virus on a 11-month-old male.
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Original:  "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods," said Mao at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO  
Revised:  "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods," said Mao at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO . 
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Original:  Health Ministry spokesman Mao Qunan expressed confidence that the games would not be affected, saying: "We are confident the potential outbreak will not affect the Beijing Olympic Games ." "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods ," said Mao at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO .
Revised:  "We are confident the potential outbreak will not affect the Beijing Olympic Games ." "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods ," said Mao at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO .
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Original:  Health Ministry spokesman Mao Qunan expressed confidence that the games would not be affected, saying: "We are confident the potential outbreak will not affect the Beijing Olympic Games ." "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods ," said Mao at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO .
Revised:  Health Ministry spokesman Mao Qunan expressed confidence that the games would not be affected, saying: "We are confident the potential outbreak will not affect the Beijing Olympic Games ," said Mao at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO .
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Original:  Health Ministry spokesman Mao Qunan expressed confidence that the games would not be affected, saying: "We are confident the potential outbreak will not affect the Beijing Olympic Games ." "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods ," said Mao at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO .
Revised:  Health Ministry spokesman Mao Qunan expressed confidence that the games would not be affected, saying: "We are confident the potential outbreak will not affect the Beijing Olympic Games ." "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods ," China's Health Ministry spokesman Mao Qunan stated. And at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO .
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Original:  Health Ministry spokesman Mao Qunan expressed confidence that the games would not be affected, saying: "We are confident the potential outbreak will not affect the Beijing Olympic Games ." "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods ," said Mao at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO .
Revised:  Health Ministry spokesman Mao Qunan expressed confidence that the games would not be affected, saying: "We are confident the potential outbreak will not affect the Beijing Olympic Games ." "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods ," said Mao at a joint press conference held by China's Ministry of Health and the WHO , he further noted that, "China is confident that it can control the spread of the disease with effective prevention methods."
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Original:  Eusebio da Silva Ferreira, known at the Black Panther, scored 41 goals in 69 appearances for the Portuguese men's national football team , was voted the best player in the world in 1965, and won the in 1966 after scoring nine goals.
Revised:  Eusebio da Silva Ferreira, known at the Black Panther, scored 41 goals in 69 appearances for the , was voted the best player in the world in 1965, and won the in 1966 after scoring nine goals.
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Original: The 71-year-old died this morning at at 4:30am (0430 ) in of a massive heart attack.
Revised: The 71-year-old died this morning at at 4:30am (0430 ) in of a heart attack.
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Original: The 71-year-old died this morning at at 4:30am ( 0430 ) in of a heart attack.
Revised: The 71-year-old died this morning at at 4:30am ( 04:30 ) in of a heart attack.
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Original:  Eusebio da Silva Ferreira, known at the Black Panther, scored 41 goals in 64 appearances for the , was voted the best player in the world in 1965, and won the in 1966 after scoring nine goals.
Revised:  Eusébio da Silva Ferreira, known at the Black Panther, scored 41 goals in 64 appearances for the , was voted the best player in the world in 1965, and won the in 1966 after scoring nine goals.
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Original: The 71-year-old died this morning at at 4:30am ( 04:30 ) in of a heart attack.
Revised: The 71-year-old died this morning at at 4:30am ( 0430 ) in of a heart attack.
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Original:  除了多項設計競賽外，今年，愛普生、燦坤、無印良品、iF設計獎等廠商，也分別展示專為文化、創意與設計產業打造的解決方案，此外，為了與台灣的畢業季相結合，台灣創意設計中心也設計了「線上畢業季」、「就業媒合會」、文化創意表演與成果展等活動，讓實體展與虛擬展合而為一。 ]] 這項展覽將於18日結束，除了行政院文建會的「 Wow!
Revised:  除了多項設計競賽外，今年，愛普生、燦坤、無印良品、iF設計獎等廠商，也分別展示專為文化、創意與設計產業打造的解決方案，此外，為了與台灣的畢業季相結合，台灣創意設計中心也設計了「線上畢業季」、「就業媒合會」、文化創意表演與成果展等活動，讓實體展與虛擬展合而為一。 w:MUJI|MUJI (in Japanese: 無印良品, Mujirushi Ryōhin)]] 這項展覽將於18日結束，除了行政院文建會的「 Wow!
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Original:  除了多項設計競賽外，今年，愛普生、燦坤、無印良品、iF設計獎等廠商，也分別展示專為文化、創意與設計產業打造的解決方案，此外，為了與台灣的畢業季相結合，台灣創意設計中心也設計了「線上畢業季」、「就業媒合會」、文化創意表演與成果展等活動，讓實體展與虛擬展合而為一。 ]] 這項展覽將於18日結束，除了行政院文建會的「 Wow!
Revised:  除了多項設計競賽外，今年，愛普生、燦坤、無印良品、iF設計獎等廠商，也分別展示專為文化、創意與設計產業打造的解決方案，此外，為了與台灣的畢業季相結合，台灣創意設計中心也設計了「線上畢業季」、「就業媒合會」、文化創意表演與成果展等活動，讓實體展與虛擬展合而為一。 ]], Tsann Kuen Trans-nation Group will also showcase different solutions for design, creative, and cultural industries. In addition, Taiwan Design Center, the show organizer, also designed several site events like "On-line Graduate Season Show", "Carrer Match-up", "Creative and Cultural Showcase and Performance", "Seminars of YODEX 2008" to link the actual exhibition with on-line exhibition. 這項展覽將於18日結束，除了行政院文建會的「 Wow!
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Original:  除了多項設計競賽外，今年，愛普生、燦坤、無印良品、iF設計獎等廠商，也分別展示專為文化、創意與設計產業打造的解決方案，此外，為了與台灣的畢業季相結合，台灣創意設計中心也設計了「線上畢業季」、「就業媒合會」、文化創意表演與成果展等活動，讓實體展與虛擬展合而為一。 ]] 這項展覽將於18日結束，除了行政院文建會的「 Wow!
Revised:  除了多項設計競賽外，今年，愛普生、燦坤、無印良品、iF設計獎等廠商，也分別展示專為文化、創意與設計產業打造的解決方案，此外，為了與台灣的畢業季相結合，台灣創意設計中心也設計了「線上畢業季」、「就業媒合會」、文化創意表演與成果展等活動，讓實體展與虛擬展合而為一。 ]] Besides for the early-announced " Wow!
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Original:  Besides for the early-announced "Wow!
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Original:  Taiwan Design Award", winners from "2008 Young Designers ’ Competition" and "2008 YODEX Interior Design Competition" will also be announced in this Saturday (May 17)
Revised:  Taiwan Design Award", winners from "2008 Young Designers ' Competition" and "2008 YODEX Interior Design Competition" will also be announced in this Saturday (May 17)
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Original:  Taiwan Design Award", winners from "2008 Young Designers ’ Competition" and "2008 YODEX Interior Design Competition" will also be announced in this Saturday (May 17)
Revised:  Taiwan Design Award", winners from "2008 Young Designers ’ Competition" and "2008 YODEX Interior Design Competition" will also be announced this Saturday (May 17)
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Original:  2008 The 27th Young Designers' Exhibition, opened on May 15 at the Taipei World Trade Center and will close at Sunday May 18.
Revised:  2008 The 27th Young Designers' Exhibition, opened on May 15 at the Taipei World Trade Center and closes Sunday May 18.
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Original:  Besides of the early-announced "Wow!
Revised:  Besides of the previously announced "Wow!
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Original:  Taiwan Design Award", winners from "2008 Young Designers' Competition" and "2008 YODEX Interior Design Competition" will also be announced this Saturday( May 17 )
Revised:  Taiwan Design Award", winners from "2008 Young Designers' Competition" and "2008 YODEX Interior Design Competition" were announced on Saturday, May 17 )
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Original:  Taiwan Design Award", winners from "2008 Young Designers' Competition" and "2008 YODEX Interior Design Competition" will also be announced this Saturday( May 17 )
Revised:  Taiwan Design Award", winners from "2008 Young Designers' Competition" and "2008 YODEX Interior Design Competition" will also be announced this Saturday( May 17 
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Original:  San Jose Earthquakes players, 2005 San Jose Earthquakes 2-3 Columbus Crew Columbus trailed the San Jose Earthquakes going into the 73rd minute, before a double-salvo by Robbie Rogers and a first of the season for Brad Evans handed the Crew a 3-1 lead.
Revised:  San Jose Earthquakes 2-3 Columbus Crew Columbus trailed the San Jose Earthquakes going into the 73rd minute, before a double-salvo by Robbie Rogers and a first of the season for Brad Evans handed the Crew a 3-1 lead.
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Original:  Los Angeles Galaxy 1-2 Red Bull New York 150px|Red Bulls VS. L.A. Galaxy On August 18, 2007 New York defeated LA Galaxy 2-1, with Juan Pablo Angel bagging the game-winner and his first of the season.
Revised:  Los Angeles Galaxy 1-2 Red Bull New York New York defeated LA Galaxy 2-1, with Juan Pablo Angel bagging the game-winner and his first of the season.
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Original:  The goal was scored at 19:11 UTC.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Claude Makelele and Paul Scholes were both given yellow cards in the 22nd minute due to a collision in air which resulted in Scholes receiving treatment for a small injury.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Alex Ferguson, Manchester United Manager In the first few minutes of the second half, Manchester United were awarded a free kick due to a foul by Ballack, which resulted Ronaldo falling to the ground.
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Original:  "Fergie%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Alex Ferguson, Manchester United manager remains impassive on the United bench, but surely he can't leave it too much longer before making a change?
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Drogba aimed to give Chelsea a lead with a shot in the 79th minute, which hit the left hand post.
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Original:  A late substitution resulted in Paul Scholes being taken off and Ryan Giggs being brought on for Manchester United
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Original: The match took place at the Luzhniki Stadium British football clubs Manchester United and Chelsea today competed in the first ever Champions League final containing only English clubs.
Revised:  British football clubs Manchester United and Chelsea today competed in the first ever Champions League final containing only English clubs.
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Original:  The UEFA Champions League is a large European football tournament, where the highest ranked teams from many countries compete.
Revised:  The is a large European football tournament, where the highest ranked teams from many countries compete.
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Original:  Claude Makelele and Paul Scholes were both given yellow cards in the 22nd minute due to a collision in air which resulted in Scholes receiving treatment for a small injury.
Revised:  and were both given yellow cards in the 22nd minute due to a collision in air which resulted in Scholes receiving treatment for a small injury.
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Original:  The goal was scored from a free kick which was taken as a result of a foul by Rio Ferdinand in the 44th minute.
Revised:  The goal was scored from a free kick which was taken as a result of a foul by in the 44th minute.
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Original:  A late substitution resulted in Paul Scholes being taken off and Ryan Giggs being brought on for Manchester United
Revised:  A late substitution resulted in Paul Scholes being taken off and being brought on for Manchester United
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Original:  Despite the commanding lead that Obama has for the Democratic nomination, Clinton continues to be committed to campaigning until the party convention in late August  
Revised:  Despite the commanding lead that Obama has for the Democratic nomination, Clinton continues to be committed to campaigning until the party convention in late August . 
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Original:  This is significantly ahead of the figure of 26\% achieved by Obama  
Revised:  This is significantly ahead of the figure of 26\% achieved by Obama . 
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Original:  "There are some who have wanted to cut this race short, but here in West Virginia, you know a thing or two about rough roads to the top of the mountain.  
Revised:  "There are some who have wanted to cut this race short, but here in West Virginia, you know a thing or two about rough roads to the top of the mountain. " 
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