wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  ” Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References France Category:1990s in Africa Category:1994 in Africa Category:History of Africa Category:Mass murder in 1994 Category:Massacres in Rwanda Category:Military scandals Category:Peacekeeping operations Category:France–Rwanda relations Category:1994 in Rwan
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Original:  ” Notes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References France Category:1990s in Africa Category:1994 in Africa Category:History of Africa Category:Mass murder in 1994 Category:Massacres in Rwanda Category:Military scandals Category:Peacekeeping operations Category:France–Rwanda relations Category:1994 in Rwan
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Original:  France provided arms and military training to Habyarimana's youth militias, the Interahamwe and Impuzamugambi, which were among the government's primary means of operationalizing the genocide following the assassination of Juvénal Habyarimana and Cyprien Ntaryamira on April 6, 1994.
Revised:  France provided arms and military training to Habyarimana's militias, the Interahamwe and Impuzamugambi, which were among the government's primary means of operationalizing the genocide following the assassination of Juvénal Habyarimana and Cyprien Ntaryamira on April 6, 1994.
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Original: She has declared an interest in becoming the running-mate for Kenyan Deputy President William Ruto in the 2022 presidential election.
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Original:  Election Results See also Murang'a County Parliament of Kenya
Revised:  See also Murang'a County Parliament of Kenya
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Original: Education and early career Sabina Wanjiru Chege attended the Kenya Institute of Management and the University of Nairobi where she obtained a Bachelor of Education degree and a Master 's degree in communication.
Revised: Education and early career Sabina Wanjiru Chege attended the Kenya Institute of Management and the University of Nairobi where she obtained a Bachelor of Education degree and a master 's degree in communication.
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Original:  Algérie 1954-1962 » . Préface Mohammed Harbi.
Revised:  Algérie 1954–1962 " . Préface Mohammed Harbi.
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Original:  After having opened and operated a cafe in Algiers, he went back to France in 1966.
Revised:  After having opened and operated a café in Algiers, he went back to France in 1966.
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Original: Subhash Ganu Bhoir () (  2 June 1958) is Shiv Sena politician from Thane district, URL He is a member of the 13th Maharashtra Legislative Assembly.
Revised: Subhash Ganu Bhoir () ( born 2 June 1958) is Shiv Sena politician from Thane district, URL He is a member of the 13th Maharashtra Legislative Assembly.
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Original:  As a result , her family moved to Sweden when she was seven  . Connie Chiu was first introduced to modeling  when her sister asked her to become a model at one of her final shows.
Revised:  As a result , her family moved to Sweden when she was seven years old . Connie Chiu was first introduced to modeling when her sister asked her to become a model at one of her final shows.
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Original:  Chiu starred in the music video for the single "Stalker" by Recoil, the solo project of Depeche Mode member Alan Wilder. 
Revised:  Chiu starred in the music video for the single "Stalker" by Recoil, the solo project of Depeche Mode member Alan Wilder. References
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Original:  After sending a black-and-white photograph to French fashion designer Jean-Paul Gaultier, he invited her to model at his atumn /winter 1994 show.
Revised:  After sending a black-and-white photograph to French fashion designer Jean-Paul Gaultier, he invited her to model at his autumn /winter 1994 show.
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Original:  Patriarch of the Ethiopian Orthodox Church Abune Matias, President of Oromia Regional State Shimelis Abdisa, Deputy Mayor of Addis Ababa Adanech Abebe and others public figures were also attended in the funeral.
Revised:  Patriarch of the Ethiopian Orthodox Church Abune Matias, President of Oromia Regional State Shimelis Abdisa, Deputy Mayor of Addis Ababa Adanech Abebe and other public figures were also attended in the funeral.
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Original:  Her burial took place on 6 July at Holy Trinity Cathedral with governmental officials and mourners.
Revised:  Her burial took place on 6 July at Holy Trinity Cathedral with government officials and mourners.
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Original:  Patriarch of the Ethiopian Orthodox Church Abune Matias, President of Oromia Regional State Shimelis Abdisa, Deputy Mayor of Addis Ababa Adanech Abebe and other public figures were also attended in the funeral.
Revised:  Patriarch of the Ethiopian Orthodox Church Abune Matias, President of Oromia Regional State Shimelis Abdisa, Deputy Mayor of Addis Ababa Adanech Abebe and other public figures also attended the funeral.
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Original:  Patriarch of the Ethiopian Orthodox Church Abune Matias, President of Oromia Regional State Shimelis Abdisa, Deputy Mayor of Addis Ababa Adanech Abebe and other public figures also attended the funeral.
Revised:  Patriarch of the Ethiopian Orthodox Church Abune Matias, President of Oromia Region Shimelis Abdisa, Deputy Mayor of Addis Ababa Adanech Abebe and other public figures also attended the funeral.
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Original:  Her father was killed during the second Ethio-Italian war , so she was raised by her grandparents until the age of nine.
Revised:  Her father was killed during the Second Italo-Ethiopian War , so she was raised by her grandparents until the age of nine.
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Original: He was active in the ranks of the FLN and participated in 1958 for "La voix de l ’ Algérie libre et combattante" (clandestine radio).
Revised: He was active in the ranks of the FLN and participated in 1958 for "La voix de l ' Algérie libre et combattante" (clandestine radio).
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Original:  His title is the " deputy chief of defence forces of Uganda " (DCDF), the second-highest military position within the UPDF.
Revised:  His title is the deputy chief of defence forces of Uganda " (DCDF), the second-highest military position within the UPDF.
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Original:  His title is the " deputy chief of defence forces of Uganda " (DCDF), the second-highest military position within the UPDF.
Revised:  His title is the " deputy chief of defence forces of Uganda (DCDF), the second-highest military position within the UPDF.
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Original: deputy chief of defence forces of Uganda (DCDF) , the second-highest military position within the UPDF.
Revised: He previously served as the Deputy Chief of Defense Forces of Uganda , the second-highest military position within the UPDF.
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Original:  He then transferred to the Embassy of Uganda in Washington, D. C. as the military attache .
Revised:  He then transferred to the Embassy of Uganda in Washington, D. C. as the military attaché .
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Original: Many old cob buildings can be found in Africa, the Middle East, and many parts of the southwestern United States  .
Revised: Many old cob buildings can be found in Africa, the Middle East, and the southwestern United States .
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Original: Some of the oldest man-made structures in Afghanistan are composed of rammed earth and cob.
Revised: Some of the oldest human-made structures in Afghanistan are composed of rammed earth and cob.
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Original:  The cob walls, in conjunction with the other sustainable features, enabled the edifice to earn a LEED Platinum rating in 2012, and it also received one of the highest scores by percentage of total points earned in any LEED URL
Revised:  The cob walls, in conjunction with the other sustainable features, enabled the edifice to earn a LEED Platinum rating in 2012, and it also received one of the highest scores by percentage of total points earned in any LEED category.
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Original: The view that people can add value to their lives by creating and maintaining a personal narrative.
Revised: Narrativity has previously been applied as a method of research and form of therapy. Narrative gerontology is intended as a “heuristic for the study of aging” where narratives are used to explore the metaphor of “life as story”. Thus, narrative gerontology is consistent with theories of aging and can be understood as a method to view ageing and what it entails. It encompasses the view that people can add value to their lives by creating and maintaining a personal narrative.
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Original:      Gerontological narratives are organized around a number of themes, such as time, story and wisdom.
Revised:  Possible needs for meaning from experiences include: Gerontological narratives are organized around a number of themes, such as time, story and wisdom.
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Original:      Gerontological narratives are organized around a number of themes, such as time, story and wisdom.
Revised:  Interpreting experiences concerning objective goals or subjective fulfilment states Stems from the desire to obtain rewards for the self. Expressing an event in specific ways can manipulate others’ perceptions and inferences thereby increasing chances of obtaining the reward. Seeking value by constructing stories that depict actions positively People may feel that they do not completely hold certain identities until these reach social reality (through being recognised and accepted by others). Therefore, stories may be told to cause surrounding people to validate identity claims. To pass along information Narratives appear to be effective in teaching others. For example, the average college student will typically recall illustrative anecdotes to a greater degree than the actual principles taught. The desire to attract others and seeking self-worth Narratives that evoke emotional movement can be used to entertain people which aids in increasing the narrator’s attractiveness. Gerontological narratives are organized around a number of themes, such as time, story and wisdom.
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Original:      Gerontological narratives are organized around a number of themes, such as time, story and wisdom.
Revised:  Themes Gerontological narratives are organized around a number of themes, such as time, story and wisdom.
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Original:               Research suggests that the richer the story the more resilient the person.
Revised:  Levels Research suggests that the richer the story the more resilient the person.
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Original:               Research suggests that the richer the story the more resilient the person.
Revised:  Investigations Research suggests that the richer the story the more resilient the person.
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Original:  References Category:Gerontolo  
Revised:  Using guided autobiographies, research has found that as individuals aged, their narratives suggested they were self-attributing traits of the opposite genders, albeit to different extents. As such, on an individual level, narratives of men and women and how they interpret their lives is not explained by gender role stereotypes. Category:Gerontolo 
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Original:  References Category:Gerontolo  
Revised:  References Research suggests narratives can differ depending on the mode of narration. Overall, autobiographical writing groups express more self-refining moments or those related to individual turning points. Conversely, oral reminiscence groups express more group-defining or generally shared historical moments. 
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Original:  References Category:Gerontolo  
Revised:  References Category:Gerontolo Inclusion of technology Common motivations for sharing life narratives through reminiscence involve the maintenance of a sense of self and the intergenerational transfer of knowledge. Further purposes include reinforcing claims to dignity and acting as a means of revisiting positive experiences. However, the nearness of death can create feelings of potential ‘social erasure’. Recording memories using digital tools have been explored, including the possibility of intergenerational digital storytelling. The ability to preserve memories thus provide a semblance of ‘life after death’ and a method of allowing the elderly to feel that they continue to play a role in their loved ones’ lives once they pass
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Original:  He served as Pakistan's Ambassador to France and as Permanent Delegate to UNESCO in Paris .
Revised:  He served as Pakistan's Ambassador to France and as Permanent Delegate to UNESCO .
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Original:  Other postings in his career were to Ankara and New Delhi, and as Director of the Foreign Minister's Office and Director General for South Asia in the Ministry of Foreign Affairs.
Revised:  Other postings were to Ankara and New Delhi, and as Director of the Foreign Minister's Office and Director General for South Asia in the Ministry of Foreign Affairs.
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Original:  Ambassador Dehlavi received several international decorations, including the Légion d'Honneur from France.
Revised:  Dehlavi received international decorations, including the Légion d'Honneur from France.
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Original:  He was appointed member of Aga Khan University Board of Trustees in 2000 and became its Chairman in July 2001 until his death in February 2014.
Revised:  He was appointed member of Aga Khan University Board of Trustees in 2000 and became its Chairman from July 2001 until his death in February 2014.
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Original:  Early life Saidulla Khan Dehlavi was born on 18 May 1941 in Calcutta, to Genevieve Chantrenne and Samiulla Khan Dehlavi, the elder of two sons.
Revised:  Early life Dehlavi was born on 18 May 1941 in Calcutta, to Genevieve Chantrenne and Samiulla Khan Dehlavi, the elder of two sons.
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Original:  His father Samiulla Khan Dehlavi served in the Indian Civil Service before rising to the post of Foreign Secretary in the Pakistan Foreign Service, serving as ambassador in Italy, Egypt, Switzerland (simultaneously accredited to Albania), United Kingdom, France (simultaneously accredited to Ireland and UNESCO), Russia and Germany.
Revised:  His father Samiulla Khan Dehlavi served in the Indian Civil Service before rising to Foreign Secretary in the Pakistan Foreign Service, serving as ambassador in Italy, Egypt, Switzerland (simultaneously accredited to Albania), United Kingdom, France (simultaneously accredited to Ireland and UNESCO), Russia and Germany.
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Original:  He studied in France, Italy, and attended Rugby before graduating in Politics, Philosophy, and Economics from Oxford.
Revised:  He studied in France, Italy, and played Rugby before graduating in Politics, Philosophy, and Economics from Oxford.
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Original:  He married Talat Qureshi in 1966 and has a daughter, Maliha, a son, Ali , and a grandson, Ibrahim.
Revised:  He married Talat Qureshi in 1966 and has a daughter, Maliha, a son, Ali and a grandson, Ibrahim.
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Original:  Educational work Saidulla Khan Dehlavi served as Chairman of Aga Khan University's Board of Trustees (2001–2014), succeeding Sahabzada Yaqub Khan.
Revised:  Educational work He served as Chairman of Aga Khan University's Board of Trustees (2001–2014), succeeding Sahabzada Yaqub Khan.
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Original:  The Aga Khan University has 11 campuses spread across 8 countries and 3 continents (South and Central Asia, East Africa, and the United Kingdom).
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Original:  Personal life Saidulla Khan Dehlavi had a passion for photography and his family.
Revised:  Personal life Dehlavi had a passion for photography and his family.
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Original:  References 1. Obituary in "Le Monde " daily of 10.2.14 which reads : "Les nombreux amis de Saidullah Khan Dehlavi, chevalier de la Legion d'honneur, ont la tristesse d'annoncer le deces a Karachi, le 4 fevrier 2014, de ce grand diplomate pakistanais qui fut notamment ambassadeur a Paris de 1991 a 1998.
Revised:  References Obituary in Le Monde of 10.2.14 which reads : "Les nombreux amis de Saidullah Khan Dehlavi, chevalier de la Legion d'honneur, ont la tristesse d'annoncer le deces a Karachi, le 4 fevrier 2014, de ce grand diplomate pakistanais qui fut notamment ambassadeur a Paris de 1991 a 1998.
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Original:  References 1. Obituary in "Le Monde " daily of 10.2.14 which reads : "Les nombreux amis de Saidullah Khan Dehlavi, chevalier de la Legion d'honneur, ont la tristesse d'annoncer le deces a Karachi, le 4 fevrier 2014, de ce grand diplomate pakistanais qui fut notamment ambassadeur a Paris de 1991 a 1998.
Revised:  References 1. Obituary in "Le Monde " daily of 10.2.14 : "Les nombreux amis de Saidullah Khan Dehlavi, chevalier de la Legion d'honneur, ont la tristesse d'annoncer le deces a Karachi, le 4 fevrier 2014, de ce grand diplomate pakistanais qui fut notamment ambassadeur a Paris de 1991 a 1998.
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Original:  Il a contribue au resserrement des liens entre son pays et la France ainsi qu'au rayonnement des cultures pakistanaises et francaises." 2. *France 's "Le Monde" daily's archives from 1963 - 2014 on the subject of Samiullah Khan Dehlavi and Jamil Dehlavi
Revised:  Il a contribue au resserrement des liens entre son pays et la France ainsi qu'au rayonnement des cultures pakistanaises et francaises." France 's "Le Monde" daily's archives from 1963 - 2014 on the subject of Samiullah Khan Dehlavi and Jamil Dehlavi
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Original: Ambassador Saidulla Khan Dehlavi Saidulla Khan Dehlavi was a Pakistani career diplomat.
Revised:  Saidulla Khan Dehlavi was a Pakistani career diplomat.
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Original:  He studied for the bar at Lincoln's Inn Lincoln's Inn . After sitting the Central Superior Services exam he joined the Foreign Service in 1964.
Revised:  He studied for the bar at Lincoln's Inn . After sitting the Central Superior Services exam he joined the Foreign Service in 1964.
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Original: In popular culture Selassie was mentioned in the 1946 song “In a Shanty in Old Shanty Town” by the Johnny Long Orchestra William Saroyan wrote a short story about him titled "The Lion of Judah" in his 1971 book Letters from 74 rue Taitbout or Don't Go But If You Must Say Hello To Everybody.
Revised: In popular culture William Saroyan wrote a short story about him titled "The Lion of Judah" in his 1971 book Letters from 74 rue Taitbout or Don't Go But If You Must Say Hello To Everybody.
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Original: Name Haile Selassie was known as a child as Lij Tafari Makonnen (Amharic: ;
Revised:  Haile Selassie was known as a child as Lij Tafari Makonnen (Amharic: ;
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Original:  Ethiopian Treasures – Emperor Haile Selassie I Imperial Crown Council of Ethiopia Speech to the League of Nations, June 1936 (full text) Rare and Unseen: Haile Selassie – slideshow by Life magazine  Marcus Garvey's prophecy of Haile Selassie I as the returned messiah Haile Selassie I and the Italo-Ethiopian war Haile Selassie I, the Later Years A critical look at the reign of Emperor Haile Selassie I of Ethiopia BBC article, memories of his personal servant
Revised:  Ethiopian Treasures – Emperor Haile Selassie I Imperial Crown Council of Ethiopia Speech to the League of Nations, June 1936 (full text) Rare and Unseen: Haile Selassie – slideshow by Life magazine '' Marcus Garvey's prophecy of Haile Selassie I as the returned messiah Haile Selassie I and the Italo-Ethiopian war Haile Selassie I, the Later Years A critical look at the reign of Emperor Haile Selassie I of Ethiopia BBC article, memories of his personal servant
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Original:  He was a member of the Solomonic dynasty who traced his lineage to Emperor Menelik I, supposedly the son of King Solomon and Makeda the Queen of Sheba.
Revised:  He was a member of the Solomonic dynasty which claims to trace lineage to Emperor Menelik I, supposedly the son of King Solomon and Makeda the Queen of Sheba.
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Original: Recipients of Hilal-i-Pakistan Category:Recipients of the National Order of Vietnam Category:Recipients of the Order of Merit for National Foundation Category:Recipients of the Order of Polonia Restituta Category:Recipients of the Order of Saints Maurice and Lazarus Category:Recipients of the Order of the Liberator General San Martin Category:Recipients of the Order of the Star of Ghana Category: Unsolved deaths Category: Recipients of the Order of the White Eagle ( Polan
Revised: Recipients of Hilal-i-Pakistan Category:Recipients of the National Order of Vietnam Category:Recipients of the Order of Merit for National Foundation Category:Recipients of the Order of Polonia Restituta Category:Recipients of the Order of Saints Maurice and Lazarus Category:Recipients of the Order of the Liberator General San Martin Category:Recipients of the Order of the Star of Ghana Category: Recipients of the Order of the White Eagle ( Polan
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Original:  through the AICPA/CICA Privacy Task Force. cite web url = URL title = Generally Accepted Privacy Principles (GAPP) << CIPP Guide The GAPP were previously known as the AICPA/CICA Privacy Framework and is founded on a single privacy principle, being that personal information must be collected, used, retained and disclosed in compliance with the commitments in the entity’s privacy notice and with criteria set out in the GAPP issued by the AICPA/CICA.
Revised:  through the AICPA/CICA Privacy Task Force. The GAPP were previously known as the AICPA/CICA Privacy Framework and is founded on a single privacy principle, being that personal information must be collected, used, retained and disclosed in compliance with the commitments in the entity’s privacy notice and with criteria set out in the GAPP issued by the AICPA/CICA.
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Original:  This privacy objective is supported by ten main principles and over seventy objectives, with associated measurable criteria. cite web url = URL title = Generally Accepted Privacy Principles (GAPP) << CIPP Guide Privacy is defined in Generally Accepted Privacy Principles as “the rights and obligations of individuals and organizations with respect to the collection, use, retention, disclosure, and disposal of personal information.
Revised:  This privacy objective is supported by ten main principles and over seventy objectives, with associated measurable criteria. Privacy is defined in Generally Accepted Privacy Principles as “the rights and obligations of individuals and organizations with respect to the collection, use, retention, disclosure, and disposal of personal information.
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Original:  ” cite web url = URL title = Generally Accepted Privacy Principles, CPA and CA Practitioner Version%DIFDELCMD < }} %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See Also Personally identifiable information Privacy Right to privacy References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Personal identification documents Category:Privacy Category:Personal life Category:Data security Category:Accounting terminolo
Revised:  cite web url = URL title = Generally Accepted Privacy Principles, CPA and CA Practitioner Version%DIFDELCMD < }} %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See Also Personally identifiable information Privacy Right to privacy References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Personal identification documents Category:Privacy Category:Personal life Category:Data security Category:Accounting terminolo
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