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Original:  Before the evening , Japan and South Korea easily made a winning streak in Women's Team Round Robin , Chinese Taipei, the host team, successively beat South Korea and Hong Kong in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  Before the evening , Japan and South Korea easily made a winning streak in Women's Team Round Robin , Chinese Taipei, the host team, beat South Korea and Hong Kong in Men's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  In the evening of two finales, Japan reversed Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei kept their best performance with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist of 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, made a major impact and defeated Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  In the evening of two table tennis finals, Japan beat Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei kept their best performance with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist of 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, made a major impact and defeated Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  In the evening of two finales, Japan reversed Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei kept their best performance with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist of 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, made a major impact and defeated Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  In the evening of two finales, Japan reversed Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei continued to win with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist of 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, made a major impact and defeated Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  In the evening of two finales, Japan reversed Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei kept their best performance with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist of 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, made a major impact and defeated Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  In the evening of two finales, Japan reversed Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei kept their best performance with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist in the 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, made a major impact and defeated Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  In the evening of two finales, Japan reversed Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei kept their best performance with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist of 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, made a major impact and defeated Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  In the evening of two finales, Japan reversed Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei kept their best performance with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist of 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, making a major impact and defeated Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  In the evening of two finales, Japan reversed Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei kept their best performance with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist of 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, made a major impact and defeated Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  In the evening of two finales, Japan reversed Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei kept their best performance with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist of 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, made a major impact in defeating Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  The events took place at the Taipei Arena, teh Taipei Nangang Sports Center, the National Taipei University of Education, Taipei Municipal University of Education, and Yinfeng Riverside Park.
Revised:  The events took place at the Taipei Arena, the Taipei Nangang Sports Center, the National Taipei University of Education, Taipei Municipal University of Education, and Yinfeng Riverside Park.
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Original:  Approximate 300 participants from 13 countries (including the host, Chinese Taipei) took part in this event.
Revised:  Approximately 300 participants from 13 countries (including the host, Chinese Taipei) took part in this event.
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Original:  Before the main competition, the Taipei City Government yesterday nveiled a new slogan - "Power in me!" and started the one-year countdown for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
Revised:  Before the main competition, the Taipei City Government yesterday unveiled a new slogan - "Power in me!" and started the one-year countdown for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
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Original:  During the day, Japan and South Korea easily won in the Women's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  During the day, Japan and South Korea won in the Women's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  In the evening of two table tennis finals, Japan beat Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei continued to win with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist in the 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, making a major impact in defeating Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  In the evening during two table tennis finals, Japan beat Korea in a 3-1 set in Women's Team Round Robin, the Chinese Taipei continued to win with Chih-hsuan Weng, a gold medalist in the 2005 World Deaf Table Tennis Championship, making a major impact in defeating Japan with a 3-1 set in Men's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  However India in an statement yesterday reiterated its commitment to non-proliferation and voluntary moratorium on further nuclear tests and highlighted its past history in abiding the non-proliferation commitments in spite being outside the ambit of NPT, which it terms as discriminatory  
Revised:  However India in an statement yesterday reiterated its commitment to non-proliferation and voluntary moratorium on further nuclear tests and highlighted its past history in abiding the non-proliferation commitments in spite being outside the ambit of NPT, which it terms as discriminatory . 
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Original: With a USD 100 billion nuclear trade possible over the next 10 years, a number of countries including France, Russia and Canada are  vying for a piece of action.
Revised: With a USD 100 billion nuclear trade possible over the next 10 years, a number of countries including France, Russia and Canada are all vying for a piece of action.
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Original:  Latest reports indicate that US administration is working overtime to ensure a sooth passage for the deal in Congress session that began on Monday and trying to persuade the lawmakers not to insist on the mandatory 30 day period required to present the agreement for approval.
Revised:  Latest reports indicate that US administration is working overtime to ensure a smooth passage for the deal in Congress session that began on Monday and trying to persuade the lawmakers not to insist on the mandatory 30 day period required to present the agreement for approval.
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Original:  If every thing goes fine, a grateful Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh may come over to Washington DC by the end of the month to ink the agreement that will herald the end of India's long nuclear winter
Revised:  If every thing goes fine, a grateful Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh may travel to Washington DC by the end of the month to ink the agreement that will herald the end of India's long nuclear winter
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Original: The Indo-US civil nuclear cooperation agreement gained a waiver from the 45-member Nuclear Suppliers Group (NSG) in Vienna on Saturday.
Revised: The Indo-US civil nuclear cooperation agreement which gained waiver from the 45-member Nuclear Suppliers Group (NSG) in Vienna on Saturday.
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Original:  With this deal India joins a select club of nations who are free to pursue nuclear weapons, without the international watchdog International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) breathing down its neck.
Revised:  With this deal India joins a select club of nations free to have nuclear weapons, without the international watchdog International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) breathing down its neck.
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Original:  NSG's India specific waiver comes after strong opposition primarily sponsored by China and supported by New Zealand and Austria amongst a few others.
Revised:  The waiver comes after strong opposition primarily sponsored by China and supported by New Zealand and Austria amongst a few others.
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Original:  NSG's India specific waiver comes after strong opposition primarily sponsored by China and supported by New Zealand and Austria amongst a few others.
Revised:  NSG's India specific waiver comes after strong opposition sponsored by China and supported by New Zealand and Austria amongst a few others.
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Original:  China , a 1992 signatory of Nuclear Non-proliferation Treaty (NPT) and known proliferator of nuclear technology to Pakistan and North Korea , feels that NPT will be weakened by this waiver .
Revised:  China , a 1992 signatory of Nuclear Non-proliferation Treaty (NPT) has allegedly transferred nuclear technology to Pakistan and North Korea , feels that NPT will be weakened by this waiver .
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Original:  China , a 1992 signatory of Nuclear Non-proliferation Treaty (NPT) and known proliferator of nuclear technology to Pakistan and North Korea , feels that NPT will be weakened by this waiver .
Revised:  China , a 1992 signatory of Nuclear Non-proliferation Treaty (NPT) and known proliferator of nuclear technology to Pakistan and North Korea .
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Original:  However India in an statement yesterday reiterated its commitment to non-proliferation and voluntary moratorium on further nuclear tests and highlighted its past history in abiding the non-proliferation commitments in spite being outside the ambit of NPT, which it terms as discriminatory .
Revised:  However India has reiterated its commitment to non-proliferation and voluntary moratorium on further nuclear tests and highlighted its past history in abiding the non-proliferation commitments in spite being outside the ambit of NPT, which it terms as discriminatory .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  However India in an statement yesterday reiterated its commitment to non-proliferation and voluntary moratorium on further nuclear tests and highlighted its past history in abiding the non-proliferation commitments in spite being outside the ambit of NPT, which it terms as discriminatory .
Revised:  However India in an statement yesterday reiterated its commitment to non-proliferation and voluntary moratorium on further nuclear tests .
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Latest reports indicate that US administration is working overtime to ensure a smooth passage for the deal in Congress session that began on Monday and trying to persuade the lawmakers not to insist on the mandatory 30 day  period required to present the agreement for approval.
Revised:  Latest reports indicate that US administration is working overtime to ensure a smooth passage for the deal in Congress session that began on Monday and trying to persuade the lawmakers not to insist on the mandatory 30 day rest period required to present the agreement for approval.
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Original:  If every thing goes fine, a grateful Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh may travel to Washington DC by the end of the month to ink the agreement that will herald the end of India's long nuclear winter
Revised:  If every thing goes fine, a grateful Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh may travel to Washington DC by the end of the month to ink the agreement 
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Original: The Indo-US civil nuclear cooperation agreement  which gained waiver from the 45-member Nuclear Suppliers Group (NSG) in Vienna on September 6, 2008  will be ratified by the US Congress to remove 34 years of sanctions against India, following a nuclear device testing in 1974.
Revised: The Indo-US civil nuclear cooperation agreement , which gained waiver from the 45-member Nuclear Suppliers Group (NSG) in Vienna on September 6, 2008 will be ratified by the US Congress to remove 34 years of sanctions against India, following a nuclear device testing in 1974.
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Original: The Indo-US civil nuclear cooperation agreement  which gained waiver from the 45-member Nuclear Suppliers Group (NSG) in Vienna on September 6, 2008  will be ratified by the US Congress to remove 34 years of sanctions against India, following a nuclear device testing in 1974.
Revised: The Indo-US civil nuclear cooperation agreement which gained waiver from the 45-member Nuclear Suppliers Group (NSG) in Vienna on September 6, 2008 , will be ratified by the US Congress to remove 34 years of sanctions against India, following a nuclear device testing in 1974.
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Original:  The waiver comes after strong opposition sponsored by Chinaand supported by New Zealand and Austria amongst a few others.
Revised:  The waiver comes after strong opposition from China, New Zealand and Austria amongst a few others.
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Original:  Meanwhile India has agreed to the US request to hold back discussions with others till US Congressional ratification becomes a reality, so as not to prejudice the US firms.
Revised:  Meanwhile India has agreed to the US request to hold back discussions with others till US Congressional ratification so as not to prejudice the US firms.
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Original:  If every thing goes fine, a grateful Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh may reach Washington DC on September 25, 2008 to ink the agreement
Revised:  If every thing goes fine, a grateful Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh on September 25, 2008 to ink the agreement
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Original:  In what seems to be a gathering of information on Schaper from other online sources, according to Enturbulation.org, the result of releasing the information has resulted in legal and physical threats from Schaper to someone, known as 'HouseSpiderV2' on Enturbulation, who has claimed to have released e-mail correspondents between him and Schaper.
Revised:  In what seems to be a gathering of information on Schaper from other online sources, according to Enturbulation.org, the result of releasing the information has resulted in legal and physical threats from Schaper to someone, known as 'HouseSpiderV2' on Enturbulation, who has claimed to have released e-mail correspondence between him and Schaper.
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Original: A user named "Oschaper" has written articles on the online open-sourced encyclopedia Wikipedia about Peephole TV and Volksmusik TV.
Revised: A user named "Oschaper" has written articles on the online encyclopedia Wikipedia about Peephole TV and Volksmusik TV.
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Original:  He died when a while working in a construction site.
Revised:  He died while working in a construction site.
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Original: One of the dead (Luke Korns) was a 11-year-boy man from Wausau, WI. Stroud.
Revised: One of the dead (Luke Korns) was a 11-year-boy from Wausau, WI. Stroud.
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Original:  "Give up meat for one day [a week] initially, and decrease it from there.   
Revised:  "Give up meat for one day [a week] initially, and decrease it from there. " 
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Original:  but they may not realise that changing what's on their plate could have an even bigger effect," she said in response to the comments made by the UN climate scientist.
Revised:  but they may not realize that changing what's on their plate could have an even bigger effect," she said in response to the comments made by the UN climate scientist.
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Original:  "The NFU is committed to ensuring farming is part of the solution to climate change, rather than being part of the problem," said a spokesperson for the organisation . "We strongly support research aimed at reducing methane emissions from livestock farming by, for example, changing diets and using anaerobic digestion.
Revised:  "The NFU is committed to ensuring farming is part of the solution to climate change, rather than being part of the problem," said a spokesperson for the organization . "We strongly support research aimed at reducing methane emissions from livestock farming by, for example, changing diets and using anaerobic digestion.
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Original:  The Polish team of Edyta Herbuś and Marcin Mrocz have won the Eurovision Dance Contest 2008.
Revised:  The Polish team of Edyta Herbuś and Marcin Mroczek have won the Eurovision Dance Contest 2008.
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Original: However, Bulgaria and Romania , both heavily indebted themselves, have announced that they intend to recoup as much as possible of the debt owed them by Iraq, claiming that the inflow of cash from Iraq is essential to their respective economies.
Revised: However, Bulgaria and Romania have announced that they intend to recoup as much as possible of the debt owed them by Iraq, claiming that the inflow of cash from Iraq is essential to their respective economies.
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Original:  The three-phase plan approved by the creditors calls for an immediate cancellation of 30 percent of Iraq's current debt, which will be followed by another 30 percent in 2005 upon approval of an economic program for the nation by the International Monetary Fund and 20 percent in 2008 after an evaluation of the effectiveness of the program.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The plan is the culmination of a trans-Atlantic struggle over the amount of Iraqi debt to be forgiven, the United States pushing for a 90 to 95 percent reduction while France argued for much less
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: " Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " had been started yesterday in Taipei, Taiwan.
Revised: The ' Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " had been started yesterday in Taipei, Taiwan.
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Original: " Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " had been started yesterday in Taipei, Taiwan.
Revised: " Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 ' started yesterday in Taipei, Taiwan.
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Original:  Unlike taekwondo event applied single elimination rule, events from karate and judo applied round robin rule in this competition .
Revised:  Unlike the taekwondo event which applied a single elimination rule, events from karate and judo applied round robin rule in this competition .
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Original:  Unlike taekwondo event applied single elimination rule, events from karate and judo applied round robin rule in this competition .
Revised:  Unlike taekwondo event applied single elimination rule, events from karate and judo applied round robin rules in their competitions .
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Original:  Athletes from 7 nations including Argentina, Chinese Taipei (the host), Greece, Hong Kong, Japan, South Korea, Turkey, and USA mainly participated in this event.
Revised:  Athletes from 7 nations including Argentina, Chinese Taipei (the host), Greece, Hong Kong, Japan, South Korea, Turkey, and USA were among the main participants this event.
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Original:  As of recent inspection , European and American athletes progressively threatened athletes from East Asians with their actual strengths grew up rapidly . Guler Muhammed from Turkey made an unbeaten record to win his gold medal in Men's 58kg class.
Revised:  As of recent inspection , European and American athletes threatened athletes from East Asians with their actual strengths grew up rapidly . Guler Muhammed from Turkey made an unbeaten record to win his gold medal in Men's 58kg class.
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Original:  As of recent inspection , European and American athletes progressively threatened athletes from East Asians with their actual strengths grew up rapidly . Guler Muhammed from Turkey made an unbeaten record to win his gold medal in Men's 58kg class.
Revised:  As of recent inspection , European and American athletes progressively threatened athletes from East Asians with what appeared to be a greater strength . Guler Muhammed from Turkey made an unbeaten record to win his gold medal in Men's 58kg class.
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Original:  As of recent inspection , European and American athletes progressively threatened athletes from East Asians with their actual strengths grew up rapidly . Guler Muhammed from Turkey made an unbeaten record to win his gold medal in Men's 58kg class.
Revised:  As of recent inspection , European and American athletes progressively threatened athletes from East Asians with their actual strengths grew up rapidly . Guler Muhammed from Turkey accomplished a new record to win his gold medal in Men's 58kg class.
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Original:  But European and American spectators witnessed best performance from the host after Bo-cong Lin and Szu-jou Lu respectively won gold medals from "Men's 58kg to 68kg" and "Women's 49kg to 57kg" classes.
Revised:  But European and American spectators were witnesses to the performance from the host after Bo-cong Lin and Szu-jou Lu respectively won gold medals from "Men's 58kg to 68kg" and "Women's 49kg to 57kg" classes.
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Original:  But European and American spectators witnessed best performance from the host after Bo-cong Lin and Szu-jou Lu respectively won gold medals from "Men's 58kg to 68kg" and "Women's 49kg to 57kg" classes.
Revised:  But European and American spectators witnessed best performance from the host after Bo-cong Lin and Szu-jou Lu won gold medals from "Men's 58kg to 68kg" and "Women's 49kg to 57kg" classes.
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Original:  The karate event distinguish classes with different weights, men's are under 65kg, under 75kg, and over 75kg;
Revised:  The karate event distinguishes classes with different weights, men's are under 65kg, under 75kg, and over 75kg;
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Original:  women's just differed classes with 60kg.
Revised:  women's just differed with classes at 60kg.
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Original:  Juan Matias Diaz from Argentina shone  the battlefield with a 3rd-straight-win  to win his gold medal in Men's under 65kg class;
Revised:  Juan Matias Diaz from Argentina shone in the battlefield with a 3rd-straight-win to win his gold medal in Men's under 65kg class;
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Original:  Juan Matias Diaz from Argentina shone  the battlefield with a 3rd-straight-win  to win his gold medal in Men's under 65kg class;
Revised:  Juan Matias Diaz from Argentina shone the battlefield with a 3rd-straight-win , to win his gold medal in Men's under 65kg class;
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Original:  but in Men's under 65kg class, with Russian athlete Evgeniy Pavlyuchenko had gave up, Takahiro Kojima easily won his gold medal by defeating his teammate Akinobe Miyashita.
Revised:  but in Men's under 65kg class, Russian athlete Evgeniy Pavlyuchenko had gave up, Takahiro Kojima easily won his gold medal by defeating his teammate Akinobe Miyashita.
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Original:  but in Men's under 65kg class, with Russian athlete Evgeniy Pavlyuchenko had gave up, Takahiro Kojima easily won his gold medal by defeating his teammate Akinobe Miyashita.
Revised:  but in Men's under 65kg class, with Russian athlete Evgeniy Pavlyuchenko had to give up, and Takahiro Kojima won his gold medal by defeating his teammate Akinobe Miyashita.
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Original:  In judo, it was the first  ever that two athletes both won bronze medal in the same class since this invitation games started yesterday.
Revised:  In judo, it was the first time ever that two athletes both won bronze medal in the same class since this invitation games started yesterday.
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Original:  In judo, it was the first  ever that two athletes both won bronze medal in the same class since this invitation games started yesterday.
Revised:  In judo, it was the first ever that two athletes both won bronze medals in the same class since this invitation games started yesterday.
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