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Original:  Then, they proceeded to take the official photograph, which will be officially published on the website of the Municipality of Pichilemu on Tuesday  
Revised:  Then, they proceeded to take the official photograph, which will be officially published on the website of the Municipality of Pichilemu on Tuesday . 
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Original: Urzúa, and two Pichileminian folklore groups played several cuecas, Chile's national dance, and people was invited to dance.
Revised: Urzúa, and two Pichileminian folk music groups played several cuecas, Chile's national dance, and people was invited to dance.
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Original: Urzúa, and two Pichileminian folklore groups played several cuecas, Chile's national dance, and people was invited to dance.
Revised: Urzúa, and two Pichileminian folklore groups played several cuecas, Chile's national dance, and people were invited to dance.
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Original:  His death was announced by his son, also named Leonard Skinner who also said that he was suffering from Alzheimer's diseas 
Revised:  His death was announced by his son, also named Leonard Skinner who also said that he was suffering from Alzheimer's disease. 
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Original:  He had been at the home for about a yea  
Revised:  He had been at the home for about a year. 
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Original: File:Lynyrd 2008 (2).jpg|Lynyrd Skynyrd performing in concert in 2008]] Leonard Skinner, the namesake of rock band Lynyrd Skynyrd  has died at the age of 77.
Revised: File:Lynyrd 2008 (2).jpg|Lynyrd Skynyrd performing in concert in 2008]] Leonard Skinner, the namesake of rock band Lynyrd Skynyrd , has died at the age of 77.
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Original: Emma's Imagination, a solo music act otherwise identified as Emma Gillespie, has been declared as the winner of Must Be The Music , a music talent programme broadcast on Sky1 in the United Kingdom.
Revised: Emma's Imagination, a solo music act otherwise identified as Emma Gillespie, has been declared as the winner of , a music talent programme broadcast on Sky1 in the United Kingdom.
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Original: Emma's Imagination, a solo music act otherwise identified as Emma Gillespie, has been declared as the winner of Must Be The Music , a music talent programme broadcast on Sky1 in the United Kingdom.
Revised: Emma's Imagination, a solo music act otherwise identified as Emma Gillespie, has been declared as the winner of Must Be The Music , a music talent programme broadcast on in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  As the winner of the series, Emma gains a prize of £ 100,000 ( US$155,484, €119,061, A$ 164,130, C 159,968).
Revised:  As the winner of the series, Emma gains a prize of 100,000 ( US$155,484, €119,061, A$ 164,130, C 159,968).
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Original:  As the winner of the series, Emma gains a prize of £ 100,000 ( US$155,484, €119,061, A$ 164,130, C 159,968).
Revised:  As the winner of the series, Emma gains a prize of £ 100,000 ( 155,484, 119,061, 164,130, C 159,968).
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Original:  As the winner of the series, Emma gains a prize of £ 100,000 ( US$155,484, €119,061, A$ 164,130, C 159,968).
Revised:  As the winner of the series, Emma gains a prize of £ 100,000 ( US$155,484, €119,061, A$ 164,130, 159,968).
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Original:  "This Day", the single from Emma's Imagination, had already achieved number 12 in both the alternative music chart and the iTunes chart by the time of the series' conclusion, according to Sky News Online 
Revised:  "This Day", the single from Emma's Imagination, had already achieved number 12 in both the alternative music chart and the iTunes chart by the time of the series' conclusion, according to . 
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Original:  Greenpeace activists demanded the creation of marine parks to Chilean President Sebastián Piñera, in the middle of Revista Naval ( Naval Magazine, an exhibition of naval ships of the Chilean Marine ), with a great canvas which said "¡Parques Marinos Ahora!" (Marine Parks Now!).
Revised:  Greenpeace activists demanded the creation of marine parks to Chilean President Sebastián Piñera, in the middle of Revista Naval ( an exhibition of naval ships of the Chilean Marine ), with a great canvas which said "¡Parques Marinos Ahora!" (Marine Parks Now!).
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Original:  Greenpeace activists demanded the creation of marine parks to Chilean President Sebastián Piñera, in the middle of Revista Naval ( Naval Magazine, an exhibition of naval ships of the Chilean Marine ), with a great canvas which said "¡Parques Marinos Ahora!" (Marine Parks Now!).
Revised:  Greenpeace activists demanded the creation of marine parks to Chilean President Sebastián Piñera, in the middle of Revista Naval ( Naval Magazine, an exhibition of ships of the Chilean Marine ), with a great canvas which said "¡Parques Marinos Ahora!" (Marine Parks Now!).
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Original:  Greenpeace activists demanded the creation of marine parks to Chilean President Sebastián Piñera, in the middle of Revista Naval ( Naval Magazine, an exhibition of naval ships of the Chilean Marine ), with a great canvas which said "¡Parques Marinos Ahora!" (Marine Parks Now!).
Revised:  Greenpeace activists demanded the creation of marine parks to Chilean President Sebastián Piñera, in the middle of Revista Naval ( Naval Magazine, an exhibition of naval ships of the Chilean Navy ), with a great canvas which said "¡Parques Marinos Ahora!" (Marine Parks Now!).
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Original:  Greenpeace activists demanded the creation of marine parks to Chilean President Sebastián Piñera, in the middle of Revista Naval ( Naval Magazine, an exhibition of naval ships of the Chilean Marine ), with a great canvas which said "¡Parques Marinos Ahora!" (Marine Parks Now!).
Revised:  Greenpeace activists demanded the creation of marine parks to Chilean President Sebastián Piñera, in the middle of Revista Naval ( Naval Magazine, an exhibition of naval ships of the Chilean Marine ), with a large banner which said "¡Parques Marinos Ahora!" (Marine Parks Now!).
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Original:   [Chilean] Government just cares about their own spectacles," said Facebook user Sylvia Verónica
Revised:  The [Chilean] Government just cares about their own spectacles," said Facebook user Sylvia Verónica
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Original:  In the study of 124 children aged eight to eighteen, kids who had antibodies to adenovirus 36 (AD36), weighed on average 50 pounds more than children who didn ;
Revised:  In the study of 124 children aged eight to eighteen, kids who had antibodies to adenovirus 36 (AD36), weighed on average 50 pounds more than children who didn '
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Original: In the study of 124 children aged eight to eighteen, kids who had antibodies to adenovirus 36 (AD36) , weighed on average 50 pounds more than children who didn't have the antibodies.
Revised: In the study of 124 children aged eight to eighteen, kids who had antibodies to adenovirus 36 (AD36) weighed on average 50 pounds more than children who didn't have the antibodies.
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Original:  The children who had the AD36 anibodies means that they had the virus at some point in their life.
Revised:  When children have AD36 anibodies means that they had the virus at some point in their life.
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Original:  The children who had the AD36 anibodies means that they had the virus at some point in their life.
Revised:  The children who had the AD36 antibodies, that means they had the virus at some point in their life.
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Original:  In another comparison of obese children who had the anibodies versus other obese children who didn't have the antibodies, the kids with the antibodies were significantly more obese, at 35 pounds more heavy .
Revised:  In another comparison of obese children who had the antibodies versus other obese children who didn't have the antibodies, the kids with the antibodies were significantly more obese, at 35 pounds more heavy .
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Original:  In another comparison of obese children who had the anibodies versus other obese children who didn't have the antibodies, the kids with the antibodies were significantly more obese, at 35 pounds more heavy .
Revised:  In another comparison of obese children who had the anibodies versus other obese children who didn't have the antibodies, the kids with the antibodies were significantly more obese, at 35 pounds heavier .
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Original:  There is currently no vaccine for AD36, and no rountine screening for the virus.
Revised:  There is currently no vaccine for AD36, and no routine screening for the virus.
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Original:  Rao also said that "Instead of coming to the doctor and requesting a test for the virus, parents would do better to discuss key behaviors to combat obesity." Dr. James Cherry, specialist in pediatric infectious diseases at the David Geffen School of Medicine at the University of California at Los Angeles (UCLA), was also interested by the study and said that if the link between AD36 and obesity was confirmed, it would be wise to develop a vaccine for the virus.
Revised:  Rao also said that "Instead of coming to the doctor and requesting a test for the virus, parents would do better to discuss key behaviors to combat obesity." Dr. James Cherry, specialist in pediatric infectious diseases at the David Geffen School of Medicine at the University of California , Los Angeles (UCLA), was also interested by the study and said that if the link between AD36 and obesity was confirmed, it would be wise to develop a vaccine for the virus.
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Original: Researchers at the University of California, San Diego have found that a common cold virus may be linked to childhood obesity in US children .
Revised: Researchers at the University of California, San Diego have found that a common cold virus may be linked to childhood obesity .
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Original:  In another comparison of obese children who had the antibodies versus other obese children who didn't have the antibodies, the kids with the antibodies were significantly more obese, at 35 pounds heavier.
Revised:  Comparing the obese children who had the antibodies versus other obese children who didn't have the antibodies, the kids with the antibodies were significantly more obese, at 35 pounds heavier.
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Original:  In another comparison of obese children who had the antibodies versus other obese children who didn't have the antibodies, the kids with the antibodies were significantly more obese, at 35 pounds heavier.
Revised:  In another comparison of obese children who had the antibodies versus the obese children who didn't have the antibodies, the kids with the antibodies were significantly more obese, at 35 pounds heavier.
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Original:  “This shows that body weight regulation and the development of obesity are very complicated issues," Dr. Jeffrey Schwimmer, the study's senior author, said.
Revised:  “This shows that body weight regulation and the development of obesity are very complicated issues," Dr. Jeffrey Schwimmer, the study's lead author, said.
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Original:  Schwimmer also said that " it  's not simply a case that some children eat too much and others don't.
Revised:  Schwimmer also said that " i 's not simply a case that some children eat too much and others don't.
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Original:  Schwimmer also said that " it  's not simply a case that some children eat too much and others don't.
Revised:  Schwimmer also said that " it t 's not simply a case that some children eat too much and others don't.
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Original: Dr. James Cherry, specialist in pediatric infectious diseases at the David Geffen School of Medicine at the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA), was also interested by the study and said that if the link between AD36 and obesity was confirmed, it would be wise to develop a vaccine for the virus . "More than 20 percent of the obese children in this study were positive for the antibody.
Revised: Dr. James Cherry, specialist in pediatric infectious diseases at the David Geffen School of Medicine at the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA), was also interested by the study . He said that if the link between AD36 and obesity was confirmed, it would be wise to develop a vaccine for the virus . "More than 20 percent of the obese children in this study were positive for the antibody.
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Original: Dr. James Cherry, specialist in pediatric infectious diseases at the David Geffen School of Medicine at the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA), was also interested by the study and said that if the link between AD36 and obesity was confirmed, it would be wise to develop a vaccine for the virus . "More than 20 percent of the obese children in this study were positive for the antibody.
Revised: Dr. James Cherry, specialist in pediatric infectious diseases at the David Geffen School of Medicine at the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA), was also interested by the study and said that if the link between AD36 and obesity were confirmed, developing a vaccine for the virus . "More than 20 percent of the obese children in this study were positive for the antibody.
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Original: Dr. James Cherry, specialist in pediatric infectious diseases at the David Geffen School of Medicine at the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA), was also interested by the study and said that if the link between AD36 and obesity was confirmed, it would be wise to develop a vaccine for the virus . "More than 20 percent of the obese children in this study were positive for the antibody.
Revised: Dr. James Cherry, specialist in pediatric infectious diseases at the David Geffen School of Medicine at the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA), was also interested by the study and said that if the link between AD36 and obesity was confirmed, it would be wise to develop a vaccine for the virus could be worthwhile. "More than 20 percent of the obese children in this study were positive for the antibody.
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Original:  If we could prevent 20 percent of all obesity, that would be pretty impressive," Cherry said  
Revised:  If we could prevent 20 percent of all obesity, that would be pretty impressive," Cherry said . 
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Original:  If we could prevent 20 percent of all obesity, that would be pretty impressive," Cherry said  
Revised:  If we could prevent 20 percent of all obesity, that would be pretty impressive," Cherry said p
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Original:  If we could prevent 20 percent of all obesity, that would be pretty impressive," Cherry said  
Revised:  If we could prevent 20 percent of all obesity, that would be pretty impressive," Cherry said idi
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Original: |left]] The King's Speech, a historical drama film  won the 2010 Toronto International Film Festival's People's Choice Awar
Revised: |left]] The King's Speech, a historical drama film won the 2010 Toronto International Film Festival's People's Choice Award
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Original: |left]] The King's Speech, a historical drama film starring Colin Firth, won the 2010 Toronto International Film Festival's People's Choice Award  
Revised: |left]] The King's Speech, a historical drama film starring Colin Firth, won the 2010 Toronto International Film Festival's People's Choice Award . 
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Original:  The film was directed by Tom Hooper, and is to be released officially on November 26, according to the Internet Movie Database  [  
Revised:  The film was directed by Tom Hooper, and is to be released officially on November 26, according to the Internet Movie Database . [ 
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Original:  "So many people were talking about that film during the festival," said Piers Handling, director of the film festival said .
Revised:  "So many people were talking about that film during the festival," said Piers Handling, director of the film festival .
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Original:  According to the documents the beneficiaries were federal deputies, who received the the money in person or through relatives, advisers, or persons nominated by Marcos Valério.
Revised:  According to the documents the beneficiaries were federal deputies, who received the money in person or through relatives, advisers, or persons nominated by Marcos Valério.
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Original: The report affirms that it is possible some payments they had been done monthly, while others to have been done by a bigger or less periodicity.
Revised: The report affirms that it is possible that some payments were done in a monthly basis, and others in a bigger or less periodicity.
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Original:  Nevertheless, the report says that the periodicity of the payments is the less important fact
Revised:  Nevertheless, accordint to the report that the periodicity of the payments is the less important fact
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Original:  Nevertheless, accordint to the report that the periodicity of the payments is the less important fact
Revised:  Nevertheless, according to the report that the periodicity of the payments is the less important fact
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Original:  Nevertheless, accordint to the report that the periodicity of the payments is the less important fact
Revised:  Nevertheless, accordint to the report the periodicity of the payments is the less important fact
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Original: The Post Office and Vote Buying parliamentary commissions of investigation  approved on Thursday (1) , for unanimity, their first joint preliminary report of activities.
Revised: The Post Office and Vote Buying parliamentary commissions of investigation unanimously approved on Thursday (1) , for unanimity, their first joint preliminary report of activities.
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Original: The Post Office and Vote Buying parliamentary commissions of investigation  approved on Thursday (1) , for unanimity, their first joint preliminary report of activities.
Revised: The Post Office and Vote Buying parliamentary commissions of investigation approved on Thursday (1) their first joint preliminary report of activities.
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Original:  The text were prepared by their redactors, Osmar Serraglio (PMDB) and Ibrahim Abi-Ackel (PP), from Post Office and Vote Buying comissions respectively.
Revised:  The text was prepared by their redactors, Osmar Serraglio (PMDB) and Ibrahim Abi-Ackel (PP), from Post Office and Vote Buying comissions respectively.
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Original:  The report put charges against 18 Brazilian deputies and the former deputy Valdemar Costa Neto (who has already resigned on August 1).
Revised:  The report put charges against 18 Brazilian deputies and the former deputy Valdemar Costa Neto (who already resigned on August 1).
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Original:  They are accused of illegal campaign financing activities, placing cronies in strategic positions in government enterprises and getting kickbacks from them, and receiveing cash payments in exchange for voting for the government in  Brazilian Congress.
Revised:  They are accused of illegal campaign finance activities, placing cronies in strategic positions in government enterprises and getting kickbacks from them, and receiveing cash payments in exchange for voting for the government in Brazilian Congress.
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Original:  They are accused of illegal campaign financing activities, placing cronies in strategic positions in government enterprises and getting kickbacks from them, and receiveing cash payments in exchange for voting for the government in  Brazilian Congress.
Revised:  They are accused of illegal campaign financing activities, placing cronies in strategic positions in government enterprises and getting kickbacks from them, and receiveing cash payments in exchange for voting for the government in the Brazilian Congress.
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Original:  The redactors called  "lame excuse" the allegation done by some parliamentarians that the resources were used to settle debts with electoral campaigns.
Revised:  The redactors called a "lame excuse" the allegation done by some parliamentarians that the resources were used to settle debts with electoral campaigns.
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Original:  The redactors called  "lame excuse" the allegation done by some parliamentarians that the resources were used to settle debts with electoral campaigns.
Revised:  The redactors called "lame excuse" the allegation made by some parliamentarians that the resources were used to settle debts with electoral campaigns.
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Original:  According to them it is "perfectly plausible" that the loans made by the businessman Marcos Valerio at the Banco Rural and the BMG for the ruling Workers' Party (PT) were false and they were created so the illegal funds could be seem as legal.
Revised:  According to them it is "perfectly plausible" that the loans taken by the businessman Marcos Valerio at the Banco Rural and the BMG for the ruling Workers' Party (PT) were false and they were created so the illegal funds could be seem as legal.
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Original:  According to them it is "perfectly plausible" that the loans made by the businessman Marcos Valerio at the Banco Rural and the BMG for the ruling Workers' Party (PT) were false and they were created so the illegal funds could be seem as legal.
Revised:  According to them it is "perfectly plausible" that the loans made by the businessman Marcos Valerio at the Banco Rural and the BMG for the ruling Workers' Party (PT) were false and created to make the illegal funds could be seem as legal.
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Original:  According to them it is "perfectly plausible" that the loans made by the businessman Marcos Valerio at the Banco Rural and the BMG for the ruling Workers' Party (PT) were false and they were created so the illegal funds could be seem as legal.
Revised:  According to them it is "perfectly plausible" that the loans made by the businessman Marcos Valerio at the Banco Rural and the BMG for the ruling Workers' Party (PT) were false and they were created so the illegal funds seem legal.
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Original:  Everything which he said that could be investigated showed to be truth , including confessions against himself .
Revised:  Everything which he said that could be investigated showed to be true , including confessions against himself .
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Original:  The report says that  were identified and appreciated several documents and they prove that great withdrawals were done in agencies of the Rural Bank, in Brasilia and Belo Horizonte,  from bank accounts of the enterprises SMPB and DNA Propaganda.
Revised:  The report says that several documents were identified and appreciated several documents and they prove that great withdrawals were done in agencies of the Rural Bank, in Brasilia and Belo Horizonte, from bank accounts of the enterprises SMPB and DNA Propaganda.
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Original:  The report says that  were identified and appreciated several documents and they prove that great withdrawals were done in agencies of the Rural Bank, in Brasilia and Belo Horizonte,  from bank accounts of the enterprises SMPB and DNA Propaganda.
Revised:  The report says that were identified and reviewed proving that large sums of money were withdrawn from agencies of the Rural Bank, in Brasilia and Belo Horizonte, from bank accounts of the enterprises SMPB and DNA Propaganda.
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Original:  The report says that  were identified and appreciated several documents and they prove that great withdrawals were done in agencies of the Rural Bank, in Brasilia and Belo Horizonte,  from bank accounts of the enterprises SMPB and DNA Propaganda.
Revised:  The report says that were identified and appreciated several documents and they prove that great withdrawals were done in agencies of the Rural Bank, in Brasilia and Belo Horizonte, as well as from bank accounts of the enterprises SMPB and DNA Propaganda.
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