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Original: The  completed its first ever assessment of the U.S. record, begun last November , and made 228 recommendations for improvements.
Revised: The has completed its first ever assessment of the U.S. record, begun last November , and made 228 recommendations for improvements.
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Original: The  completed its first ever assessment of the U.S. record, begun last November , and made 228 recommendations for improvements.
Revised: The completed its first ever assessment of the U.S. record, beginning last November they made 228 recommendations for improvements.
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Original:  On Friday, the U.S. accepted about 174 of these, agreeing to such recommendations as the humane treatment of terror suspects and repudiation of torture  but rejected the recommendation to drop the .
Revised:  On Friday, the United States accepted about 174 of these, agreeing to such recommendations as the humane treatment of terror suspects and repudiation of torture but rejected the recommendation to drop the .
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Original:  On Friday, the U.S. accepted about 174 of these, agreeing to such recommendations as the humane treatment of terror suspects and repudiation of torture  but rejected the recommendation to drop the .
Revised:  On Friday, the U.S. accepted about 174 of these, agreeing to such recommendations as the humane treatment of terror suspects and repudiation of torture , but rejected the recommendation to drop the .
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Original: The has completed its first ever assessment of the U.S. record, beginning last Novemberthey made 228 recommendations for improvements.
Revised: The has completed its first ever assessment of the United States record, begun last November. They made 228 recommendations for improvements.
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Original:  On Friday, the United States accepted about 174 of these, agreeing to such recommendations as the humane treatment of terror suspects and repudiation of torture, but rejected the recommendation to drop the .
Revised:  On Friday, the U.S. accepted about 174 of these, agreeing to such recommendations as the humane treatment of terror suspects and repudiation of torture, but rejected the recommendation to drop the .
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Original: The has completed its first ever assessment of the United States record,  begun last November.
Revised: The has completed its first ever assessment of the United States record, which begun last November.
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Original:  ICANN is the manager  the Internet's s, such , and .
Revised:  ICANN is the manager of the Internet's s, such , and .
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Original:  It stated that the establishment of a .xxx domain hopefully "will add a measure of predictability and security to the wild world of Internet websites."
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Original:  The decision means success for the Florida-based (ICM), the company that first applied for the .xxx domain in 2004.
Revised:  ICANN's decision means success for the Florida-based (ICM), the company that first applied for the .xxx domain in 2004.
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Original:  ICM hopes that the establishment  a .xxx domain will contribute a degree of predictability and security to the largely unrestrained world of Internet websites.
Revised:  ICM hopes that the establishment of a .xxx domain will contribute a degree of predictability and security to the largely unrestrained world of Internet websites.
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Original:  Anti-porn critics say that users who think they are avoiding porn by filtering out .xxx domains will therefore be mislead .
Revised:  Anti-porn critics say that users who think they are avoiding porn by filtering out .xxx domains will therefore be misled .
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Original: Yesterday, (ICANN), the agency governing  addresses, approved the creation of an "" Internet address, , on the web, first proposed in 2003.
Revised: Yesterday, (ICANN), the agency governing Internet addresses, approved the creation of an "" Internet address, , on the web, first proposed in 2003.
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Original: have closed down an  pizza restaurant for a single day for delivering despite not being licensed to do so.
Revised: have closed down an , , pizza restaurant for a single day for delivering despite not being licensed to do so.
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Original: upFile photo of empty pizza boxes. have closed down an , , pizza restaurant for a single day for delivering despite not being licensed to do so.
Revised:  have closed down an , , pizza restaurant for a single day for delivering despite not being licensed to do so.
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Original:  Italy has offered to allow aircraft use at their air bases, and Canada has already sent a aircraft to the region, though they will not immediately begin flying missions.
Revised:  Italy has offered to allow aircraft use at their air bases, and Canada has already sent an aircraft to the region, though they will not immediately begin flying missions.
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Original:  According to the newspaper , he said "The decision underlines, above all, the rights of citizens to defend their own values and their own identities.
Revised:  According to the newspaper he said, "The decision underlines, above all, the rights of citizens to defend their own values and their own identities.
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Original: The -based ruled unanimously yesterday that state school classrooms displaying did not violate the rights of non-Catholic pupils.
Revised: The -based ruled unanimously yesterday that state school classrooms displaying do not violate the rights of non-Catholic pupils.
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Original:  In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said that although the crucifix was "above all a ", it was an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence that crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influenced pupils.
Revised:  In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said that although the crucifix is "above all a ", it was an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence that crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influenced pupils.
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Original:  In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said that although the crucifix was "above all a ", it was an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence that crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influenced pupils.
Revised:  In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said that although the crucifix was "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence that crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influenced pupils.
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Original:  In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said that although the crucifix was "above all a ", it was an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence that crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influenced pupils.
Revised:  In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said that although the crucifix was "above all a ", it was an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence that crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
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Original:  The court's final ruling reversed their unanimous 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds that they violated the principles that state schools should uphold.
Revised:  The court's final ruling reverses their unanimous 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds that they violated the principles that state schools should uphold.
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Original:  The court's final ruling reversed their unanimous 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds that they violated the principles that state schools should uphold.
Revised:  The court's final ruling reversed their unanimous 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds they violated the principles that state schools should uphold.
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Original:  The appeal was handled by legal scholar , who argued that extreme secularism could threaten the use of "" , the national anthem of Britain.
Revised:  The appeal was handled by legal scholar , who argued that extreme secularism could threaten the use of "" the national anthem of Britain.
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Original: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said that although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence that crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
Revised: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence that crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
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Original: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said that although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence that crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
Revised: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision, the court said that although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
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Original:  But the decision created a vociferous outcry in many European countries such as Italy, which argued that the crucifix was a symbol, and a part of Europe's culture and history.
Revised:  But the decision created a vociferous outcry in many European countries such as Italy, which argued the crucifix was a symbol, and a part of Europe's culture and history.
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Original:  The appeal was handled by legal scholar , who argued that extreme secularism could threaten the use of British national anthem .
Revised:  The appeal was handled by legal scholar , who argued extreme secularism could threaten the use of British national anthem .
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Original: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision , the court said  although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
Revised: In a reversal of the unanimous November 2009 decision , the court said although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
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Original: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision , the court said  although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
Revised: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision the court said although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
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Original: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision , the court said  although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
Revised: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision , the court said , although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
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Original: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision , the court said  although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there was no evidence crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
Revised: In a reversal of their unanimous November 2009 decision , the court said although the crucifix is "above all a ", it is an "essentially passive symbol" and there is no evidence crucifixes displayed on classroom walls influence pupils.
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Original:  The court's final ruling reverses their unanimous 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds  they violated the principles that state schools should uphold.
Revised:  The court's final ruling reverses their 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds they violated the principles that state schools should uphold.
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Original:  The court's final ruling reverses their unanimous 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds  they violated the principles that state schools should uphold.
Revised:  The court's final ruling reverses their unanimous 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds that they violated the principles that state schools should uphold.
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Original:  The court's final ruling reverses their unanimous 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds  they violated the principles that state schools should uphold.
Revised:  The court's final ruling reverses their unanimous 2009 decision in a case brought by a Finnish-born mother living in Italy who objected to the symbols in her children's classrooms on the grounds they violated the principles state schools should uphold.
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Original:  But the decision created a vociferous outcry in many European countries  such as Italy, which argued the crucifix was a symbol, and a part of Europe's culture and history.
Revised:  But the decision created a vociferous outcry in many European countries , such as Italy, which argued the crucifix was a symbol, and a part of Europe's culture and history.
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Original:  But the decision created a vociferous outcry in many European countries  such as Italy, which argued the crucifix was a symbol, and a part of Europe's culture and history.
Revised:  But the decision created a vociferous outcry in many European countries such as Italy, which argued the crucifix is a symbol, and a part of Europe's culture and history.
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Original:  The appeal was handled by legal scholar , who argued extreme secularism could threaten the use of British national anthem .
Revised:  The appeal was handled by legal scholar , arguing extreme secularism could threaten the use of British national anthem .
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Original:  Friday's ruling will be binding on the 47 countries that are members of the , the continent's monitor of human rights, paving the way for petitions to other governments to allow religious symbols in schools for those who want them
Revised:  Friday's ruling is binding on the 47 countries that are members of the , the continent's monitor of human rights, paving the way for petitions to other governments to allow religious symbols in schools for those who want them
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Original: Israel Defense Forces (IDF) are retaliating with air strikes, helicopter , and tank fire along the border of for a mortar attack by .
Revised:  (IDF) are retaliating with air strikes, helicopter , and tank fire along the border of for a mortar attack by .
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Original: Israel Defense Forces (IDF) are retaliating with air strikes, helicopter , and tank fire along the border of for a mortar attack by .
Revised: Israel Defense Forces (IDF) are retaliating with air strikes, helicopters , and tank fire along the border of for a mortar attack by .
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Original: Israel Defense Forces (IDF) are retaliating with air strikes, helicopter , and tank fire along the border of for a mortar attack by .
Revised: Israel Defense Forces (IDF) are retaliating with air strikes, helicopter , and tank fire along the border of after a mortar attack by .
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Original:  The attacks are reported to be targeting Hamas security installations, and Hamas officials have reported 5 injuredincluding 3 security officers and 2 civilians, one a 3-year old boy
Revised:  The attacks are reported to be targeting Hamas security installations, and Hamas officials have reported five injured, including three security officers and 2 civilians, one a 3-year old boy
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Original:  The attacks are reported to be targeting Hamas security installations, and Hamas officials have reported 5 injuredincluding 3 security officers and 2 civilians, one a 3-year old boy
Revised:  The attacks are reported to be targeting Hamas security installations, and Hamas officials have reported 5 injuredincluding 3 security officers and two civilians, one a 3-year old boy
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Original:  The attacks are reported to be targeting Hamas security installations, and Hamas officials have reported 5 injuredincluding 3 security officers and 2 civilians, one a 3-year old boy
Revised:  The attacks are reported to be targeting Hamas security installations, and Hamas officials have reported 5 injuredincluding 3 security officers and 2 civilians, one a three-year old boy
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Original:  His career as a US diplomat spanned almost 28 years, with him previously serving under President Lyndon B. Johnson as deputy Attorney General, before entering the diplomatic field as deputy Secretary of State under the Presidency of Jimmy Carter.
Revised: President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss". In a statement, he described Christopher as "a resolute pursuer of peace, leading negotiations with regard to the Middle East and the Balkans, including the Dayton Agreement, which ended the war in Bosnia. Warren Christopher was a skillful diplomat, a steadfast public servant, and a faithful American." His career as a US diplomat spanned almost 28 years, with him previously serving under President Lyndon B. Johnson as deputy Attorney General, before entering the diplomatic field as deputy Secretary of State under the Presidency of Jimmy Carter.
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Original:  During this time, Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 hostages being held in Iran in 1981, an act which earned him the highest award in the US, The Presidential Medal of Freedom     
Revised:  During this time, Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 hostages being held in Iran in 1981, an act which earned him the highest award in the US, The Presidential Medal of Freedom . 
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Original:  His death, late Friday evening (March 18th), as a result of complications of Kidney and Bladder Cancer, was announced in a statement from his family . President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss ".
Revised:  His family said the death was a result of complications of Kidney and Bladder Cancer, was announced in a statement from his family . President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss ".
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Original:  His death, late Friday evening (March 18th), as a result of complications of Kidney and Bladder Cancer, was announced in a statement from his family . President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss ".
Revised:  His death, late Friday evening (March 18th), as a result of his battle with Kidney and Bladder Cancer, was announced in a statement from his family . President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss ".
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Original:  His death, late Friday evening (March 18th), as a result of complications of Kidney and Bladder Cancer, was announced in a statement from his family . President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss ".
Revised:  His death, late Friday evening (March 18th), as a result of complications of Kidney and Bladder cancer . President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss ".
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Original:  His death, late Friday evening (March 18th), as a result of complications of Kidney and Bladder Cancer, was announced in a statement from his family . President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss ".
Revised:  His death, late Friday evening (March 18th), as a result of complications of Kidney and Bladder Cancer, was announced in a statement from his family . President Obama and the First Lady announced that they are "saddened at the loss ".
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Original:  His death, late Friday evening (March 18th), as a result of complications of Kidney and Bladder Cancer, was announced in a statement from his family . President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss ".
Revised:  His death, late Friday evening (March 18th), as a result of complications of Kidney and Bladder Cancer, was announced in a statement from his family . President Obama and the First Lady are said to be "saddened at the loss ."
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Original:  In a statement, he described Christopher as "a resolute pursuer of peace, leading negotiations with regard to the Middle East and the Balkans, including the Dayton Agreement, which ended the war in Bosnia.
Revised:  In a statement, Obama described Christopher as "a resolute pursuer of peace, leading negotiations with regard to the Middle East and the Balkans, including the Dayton Agreement, which ended the war in Bosnia.
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Original:  His career as a US diplomat spanned almost 28 years, with him previously serving under President Lyndon B. Johnson as deputy Attorney General, before entering the diplomatic field as deputy Secretary of State under the Presidency of Jimmy Carter.
Revised:  Christopher's career as a US diplomat spanned almost 28 years, with him previously serving under President Lyndon B. Johnson as deputy Attorney General, before entering the diplomatic field as deputy Secretary of State under the Presidency of Jimmy Carter.
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Original:  His career as a US diplomat spanned almost 28 years, with him previously serving under President Lyndon B. Johnson as deputy Attorney General, before entering the diplomatic field as deputy Secretary of State under the Presidency of Jimmy Carter.
Revised:  His career as a US diplomat spanned almost 28 years, with him previously serving under as deputy Attorney General, before entering the diplomatic field as deputy Secretary of State under the Presidency of Jimmy Carter.
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Original:  His career as a US diplomat spanned almost 28 years, with him previously serving under President Lyndon B. Johnson as deputy Attorney General, before entering the diplomatic field as deputy Secretary of State under the Presidency of Jimmy Carter.
Revised:  His career as a US diplomat spanned almost 28 years, with him previously serving under President Lyndon B. Johnson as deputy Attorney General, before entering the diplomatic field as deputy Secretary of State under the Presidency of 
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Original:  During this time , Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 hostages being held in Iran in 1981, an act which earned him the highest award in the US, The Presidential Medal of Freedom .
Revised:  During this time , Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 hostages being held in Iran in 1981, which earned him the highest award in the US, The Presidential Medal of Freedom .
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