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Original:  He has been associated with social causes, politics and public welfare. he is passed today 23rd off March 2021 in karachi 
Revised:  He has been associated with social causes, politics and public welfare. he is passed today 23rd March 2021 in karachi 
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Original: Alhaj Shamim Uddin ( born 17 March 1931  ) is a senior politician of Pakistan.
Revised: Alhaj Shamim Uddin ( 17 March 1931 ) is a senior politician of Pakistan.
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Original:  He has been associated with social causes, politics and public welfare. he is died on 23 March 2021 in Karachi on Pakistan Day (True Pakistani leader selected the Pakistan day for his eternal journey) .
Revised:  He has been associated with social causes, politics and public welfare. He died on 23 March 2021 in Karachi on Pakistan Day (True Pakistani leader selected the Pakistan day for his eternal journey) .
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Original:  He has been associated with social causes, politics and public welfare. he is died on 23 March 2021 in Karachi on Pakistan Day (True Pakistani leader selected the Pakistan day for his eternal journey) .
Revised:  He has been associated with social causes, politics and public welfare. he is died on 23 March 2021 in Karachi on Pakistan Day .
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Original:  Category: Living people Category: 1931 births  Category:Muhajir people Category:Politicians from Karachi Category:Pakistan Muslim League (Q) politicia
Revised:  Category: 1931 births Category:Muhajir people Category:Politicians from Karachi Category:Pakistan Muslim League (Q) politicia
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Original: Alhaj Shamim Uddin (17 March 1931 – 23 March 2021) is a senior politician of Pakistan.
Revised: Alhaj Shamim Uddin (17 March 1931 – 23 March 2021) was a senior politician of Pakistan.
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Original: Early career Served as a draftsman with Municipal Board Moradabad (U.P  ) (1948 to 1950) Served as a computer draftsman with Pakistan P.W.D  (Central E/M Division) in Karachi, Pakistan (1950 to 1953) Served as a senior Draftsman with Pakistan Burma-Shell in Karachi (1953 to 1967) Served as a Chief Draftsman with Dawood Petroleum Ltd.
Revised: Early career Served as a draftsman with Municipal Board Moradabad (U.P . ) (1948 to 1950) Served as a computer draftsman with Pakistan P.W.D (Central E/M Division) in Karachi, Pakistan (1950 to 1953) Served as a senior Draftsman with Pakistan Burma-Shell in Karachi (1953 to 1967) Served as a Chief Draftsman with Dawood Petroleum Ltd.
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Original: Early career Served as a draftsman with Municipal Board Moradabad (U.P  ) (1948 to 1950) Served as a computer draftsman with Pakistan P.W.D  (Central E/M Division) in Karachi, Pakistan (1950 to 1953) Served as a senior Draftsman with Pakistan Burma-Shell in Karachi (1953 to 1967) Served as a Chief Draftsman with Dawood Petroleum Ltd.
Revised: Early career Served as a draftsman with Municipal Board Moradabad (U.P ) (1948 to 1950) Served as a computer draftsman with Pakistan P.W.D . (Central E/M Division) in Karachi, Pakistan (1950 to 1953) Served as a senior Draftsman with Pakistan Burma-Shell in Karachi (1953 to 1967) Served as a Chief Draftsman with Dawood Petroleum Ltd.
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Original:  He is still the founder and chairman of this organisation.
Revised:  He was the founder and chairman of this organisation.
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Original: Notification No: DCW/GB/6973/84 Dated: 27 May 1984 nominated by Governor  Sindh Gen.
Revised: Notification No: DCW/GB/6973/84 Dated: 27 May 1984 nominated by Governor of Sindh Gen.
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Original:  Abbasi who was the Chairman of the Council Ex Member of Provincial Assembly of Sindh (during the Speakership  Muzaffar Hussain Shah) Ex Minister of Religious affairs,Archives: Pakistani newspapers news reports, The Daily Dawn Karachi, dated july 27th,1985 Zakat and Auqaf,Archives: Pakistani newspapers news reports, Business Recorder Karachi, dated July 25th,1985 Labor and Social welfare.
Revised:  Abbasi who was the Chairman of the Council Ex Member of Provincial Assembly of Sindh (during the Speakership of Muzaffar Hussain Shah) Ex Minister of Religious affairs,Archives: Pakistani newspapers news reports, The Daily Dawn Karachi, dated july 27th,1985 Zakat and Auqaf,Archives: Pakistani newspapers news reports, Business Recorder Karachi, dated July 25th,1985 Labor and Social welfare.
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Original:  Dated : 17 August 1988 constituted after the death of President Zia-ul-Haq (during the presidency of Ghulam Ishaq Khan) Chief Election Agent Alhaj Shamim Uddin was appointed as the chief election agent for Maulauna Shafi OkaarviArchives:Authority Letter addressed to Returning Officer N.W.4, karachi by Shafi Okarvi, Subject: Appointment of chief election agent.
Revised:  Dated : 17 August 1988 constituted after the death of President Zia-ul-Haq (during the presidency of Ghulam Ishaq Khan) Chief Election Agent Alhaj Shamim Uddin was appointed the chief election agent for Maulauna Shafi OkaarviArchives:Authority Letter addressed to Returning Officer N.W.4, karachi by Shafi Okarvi, Subject: Appointment of chief election agent.
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Original:  Dated : 4 December 1970 and Zahoor ul Hasan BhopaliArchives:Appointment letter and Press release issued of Election Agent of Zahoor ul Hasan Bhopali, candidate of P.S 89 of PNA, duly identified by Mahmood Ahmed Khan, Returning Officer of P.S 89, Karachi – XIV who were the candidates of PAKISTAN NATIONAL ALLIANCE- PNA for National and Provincial Assembly respectively in 1970.
Revised:  Dated : 4 December 1970 and Zahoor ul Hasan BhopaliArchives:Appointment letter and Press release issued of Election Agent of Zahoor ul Hasan Bhopali, candidate of P.S 89 of PNA, duly identified by Mahmood Ahmed Khan, Returning Officer of P.S 89, Karachi – XIV who were the candidates of Pakistan National Alliance- PNA for National and Provincial Assembly respectively in 1970.
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Original:  Organizational affiliations Civil Defense Organization Civil Defense Organization was formed with the purpose to reduce to the minimum the number of casualties in the people, to minimise damage and dislocation to essential services, to ensure uninterrupted production in mills and factories, to provide active civilian support to war efforts, and to maintain in the people a high standard of morale and a strong "will to win".
Revised:  Organizational affiliations Civil Defense Organization Civil Defense Organization was formed with the purpose to reduce to the minimum the number of casualties in the people, to minimise damage and dislocation of essential services, to ensure uninterrupted production in mills and factories, to provide active civilian support to war efforts, and to maintain in the people a high standard of morale and a strong "will to win".
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Original:  Pakistan Islamic Forum celebrates Birth anniversary of Muhammad by organising Islamic Conferences since 1995.
Revised:  Pakistan Islamic Forum celebrates birth anniversary of Muhammad by organising Islamic Conferences since 1995.
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Original:  Pakistan Islamic Forum celebrates Birth anniversary of Muhammad by organising Islamic Conferences since 1995.
Revised:  Pakistan Islamic Forum celebrates Birth anniversary of Muhammad by organising Islamic conferences since 1995.
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Original:  President  SindhArchives: Pakistani newspapers news reports, ''The Daily Jang', Karachi, dated: 1 January 1990 Combined Opposition  Sindh (COP) in 1989 –
Revised:  President of SindhArchives: Pakistani newspapers news reports, ''The Daily Jang', Karachi, dated: 1 January 1990 Combined Opposition Sindh (COP) in 1989 –
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Original:  President  SindhArchives: Pakistani newspapers news reports, ''The Daily Jang', Karachi, dated: 1 January 1990 Combined Opposition  Sindh (COP) in 1989 –
Revised:  President SindhArchives: Pakistani newspapers news reports, ''The Daily Jang', Karachi, dated: 1 January 1990 Combined Opposition of Sindh (COP) in 1989 –
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Original:  general secretary United Muslim League – Senior Vice-President of Sindh (during the presidency of Choudry Shujat Hussain) Pakistan Muslim League (Q) in 2009 – President of Senior Muslim Leaguers Advisory Council of Sindh Religious roles Dating back to 1970s when Jamiat Ulema-e-Pakistan held the recognition as one of the exalted political party , the local residents and supporters of Alhaj Shamim Uddin encouraged him to become a part of JUP to boost it further.
Revised:  general secretary United Muslim League – Senior Vice-President of Sindh (during the presidency of Choudry Shujat Hussain) Pakistan Muslim League (Q) in 2009 – President of Senior Muslim Leaguers Advisory Council of Sindh Religious roles Dating back to 1970s when Jamiat Ulema-e-Pakistan held the recognition as one of the exalted political parties , the local residents and supporters of Alhaj Shamim Uddin encouraged him to become a part of JUP to boost it further.
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Original:  Leaders and religious figures at that time uplifted the incentives of Pakistan movement and Pakistan Muslim league .
Revised:  Leaders and religious figures at that time uplifted the incentives of Pakistan movement and Pakistan Muslim League .
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Original:  In the 1870s and 1880s, traders from East Africa began searching for slaves and ivory in the savannahs of central Africa.
Revised:  In the 1870s and 1880s, traders from East Africa began searching for slaves and ivory in the savannas of central Africa.
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Original:  However, peer review does not  prevent publication of invalid research, and there is little evidence that peer review improves the quality of published papers  .
Revised:  However, peer review does not entirely prevent publication of invalid research, and there is little evidence that peer review improves the quality of published papers .
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Original:  The peer review helps the  publisher (that is, the editor-in-chief, the editorial board or the program committee) decide whether the work should be accepted, considered acceptable with revisions, or rejected  .
Revised:  The peer review helps the academic publisher (that is, the editor-in-chief, the editorial board or the program committee) decide whether the work should be accepted, considered acceptable with revisions, or rejected .
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Original:   Kristian Andersen Nyrup, Middelalderstudier Bog IX.
Revised:  Very shitty! Kristian Andersen Nyrup, Middelalderstudier Bog IX.
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Original:  Kong Gorms SagaIndvandrerne i Danmarks historie, Bent Østergaard, Syddansk Universitetsforlag 2007, , pp. 19–24 In Old Norse, the country was called , referring to the Danish March, viz. the marches of the Danes.
Revised:  Kong Gorms Saga Indvandrerne i Danmarks historie, Bent Østergaard, Syddansk Universitetsforlag 2007, , pp. 19–24 In Old Norse, the country was called , referring to the Danish March, viz. the marches of the Danes.
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Original:  Other writers of that period, dating to the first half of the 20th century, a time known as the Golden Age of detective fiction (or more general, mystery fiction), reliant on the the closed circle and related literary devices include Dorothy L. Sayers, G. K. Chesterton, Margery Allingham, Ngaio Marsh and Americans S. S. Van Dine and Ellery Queen.
Revised:  Other writers of that period, dating to the first half of the 20th century, a time known as the Golden Age of Detective Fiction (or more general, mystery fiction), reliant on the the closed circle and related literary devices include Dorothy L. Sayers, G. K. Chesterton, Margery Allingham, Ngaio Marsh and Americans S. S. Van Dine and Ellery Queen.
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Original:  The persons involved were also commonly part of the upper class ( generally the landed gentry ) . Other settings than the country house are also possible, and many have been used in the closed circle mysteries even by Christie herself: a ship, a train, an island, and so on.
Revised:  The persons involved were also commonly part of the upper class , generally the landed gentry ) . Other settings than the country house are also possible, and many have been used in the closed circle mysteries even by Christie herself: a ship, a train, an island, and so on.
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Original:  The persons involved were also commonly part of the upper class ( generally the landed gentry ) . Other settings than the country house are also possible, and many have been used in the closed circle mysteries even by Christie herself: a ship, a train, an island, and so on.
Revised:  The persons involved were also commonly part of the upper class ( generally the landed gentry . Other settings than the country house are also possible, and many have been used in the closed circle mysteries even by Christie herself: a ship, a train, an island, and so on.
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Original:  Chiang Kai-shek had vowed to quickly return and "liberate" the mainlandLi Shui.
Revised:  Chiang Kai-shek had vowed to quickly return and "liberate" the mainland, Li Shui.
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Original:  China News this assurance became a cornerstone of the ROC's post 1949 foreign policy.
Revised:  China News and assurance that became a cornerstone of the ROC's post 1949 foreign policy.
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Original:  So began the Warlord Era: a decade of decentralized internal power struggles and prolonged armed conflict.
Revised:  So began the Warlord Era: a decade of decentralized power struggles and prolonged armed conflict.
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Original:  The KMT, under the leadership of Sun and Chiang , attempted multiple times to establish a centralized national government in Canton and Nanking between 1212-1949 . After taking Canton for a third time in 1923, the KMT successfully established a rival government in preparation for a campaign to unify China.
Revised:  The KMT, under the leadership of Sun , attempted multiple times to establish a centralized national government in Canton and Nanking between 1212-1949 . After taking Canton for a third time in 1923, the KMT successfully established a rival government in preparation for a campaign to unify China.
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Original:  The KMT, under the leadership of Sun and Chiang , attempted multiple times to establish a centralized national government in Canton and Nanking between 1212-1949 . After taking Canton for a third time in 1923, the KMT successfully established a rival government in preparation for a campaign to unify China.
Revised:  The KMT, under the leadership of Sun and Chiang , attempted multiple times to establish a national government in Canton and Nanking between 1212-1949 . After taking Canton for a third time in 1923, the KMT successfully established a rival government in preparation for a campaign to unify China.
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Original:  The KMT, under the leadership of Sun and Chiang , attempted multiple times to establish a centralized national government in Canton and Nanking between 1212-1949 . After taking Canton for a third time in 1923, the KMT successfully established a rival government in preparation for a campaign to unify China.
Revised:  The KMT, under the leadership of Sun and Chiang , attempted multiple times to establish a centralized national government in Canton . After taking Canton for a third time in 1923, the KMT successfully established a rival government in preparation for a campaign to unify China.
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Original: China, officially known as the Republic of China (ROC), was a country in East Asia based in mainland China from 1912 to 1949, prior to the relocation of its government to Taiwan as a result of the Chinese Civil War.
Revised: China, officially known as the Republic of China (ROC), was a country in East Asia based in Mainland China from 1912 to 1949, prior to the relocation of its government to Taiwan as a result of the Chinese Civil War.
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Original:  This period is often referred to as the Republican Era in mainland China or the Mainland Period in Taiwan.
Revised:  This period is often referred to as the Republican Era in Mainland China or the Mainland Period in Taiwan.
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Original:  At the same time, other violent conflicts were taking place in China: in the South, where the Communists had superior numbers, Nationalist supporters were being massacred.
Revised:  At the same time, other violent conflicts were taking place in China: in the South, where the CCP had superior numbers, Nationalist supporters were being massacred.
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Original:  Chiang Kai-shek pushed the Communists into the interior and established a government, with Nanking as its capital, in 1927.
Revised:  Chiang Kai-shek pushed the CCP into the interior and established a government, with Nanking as its capital, in 1927.
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Original: I. General Provisions II.
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Original:  Safeguarding of the intangible cultural heritage at the international level%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% V. International cooperation and assistance VI.
Revised:  Safeguarding of the intangible cultural heritage at the international level%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% VI.
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Original:  Intangible Cultural Heritage Fund%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% VII. Reports VIII.
Revised:  Intangible Cultural Heritage Fund%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% VIII.
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Original:  Transitional clause%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% IX. Final clauses Purposes of the Convention
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Original:  Criticism  The definition of intangible cultural heritage has been criticized as potentially incomplete  .
Revised:  Criticism Intangible heritage The definition of intangible cultural heritage has been criticized as potentially incomplete .
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Original: Convention for the Safeguarding of  Intangible Cultural Heritage Romania was the 30th state, ratifying the agreement on 20 January 2006.
Revised: Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Romania was the 30th state, ratifying the agreement on 20 January 2006.
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Original: Convention for the Safeguarding of  Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 11 Besides, in taking these measures, each state parties must “endeavor to ensure the widest possible participation of communities, groups, and, where appropriate, individuals that create, maintain and transmit such heritage, and to involve them actively in its management”.
Revised: Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 11 Besides, in taking these measures, each state parties must “endeavor to ensure the widest possible participation of communities, groups, and, where appropriate, individuals that create, maintain and transmit such heritage, and to involve them actively in its management”.
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Original: Convention for the Safeguarding of  Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 15 At the international level, this Convention promotes international cooperation, which includes “the exchange of information and experience, joint initiatives, and the establishment of a mechanism of assistance” to other State Parties.
Revised: Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 15 At the international level, this Convention promotes international cooperation, which includes “the exchange of information and experience, joint initiatives, and the establishment of a mechanism of assistance” to other State Parties.
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Original: Convention for the Safeguarding of  Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 19 The Committee to the Convention publishes and keeps up to date two lists of intangible cultural heritage, which are the Representative List of the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity the List of Intangible Cultural Heritage in Need of Urgent Safeguarding.
Revised: Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 19 The Committee to the Convention publishes and keeps up to date two lists of intangible cultural heritage, which are the Representative List of the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity the List of Intangible Cultural Heritage in Need of Urgent Safeguarding.
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Original: Convention for the Safeguarding of  Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 16,17 The Convention establishes Intangible Cultural Heritage Fund, the use of which is decided by the Committee.
Revised: Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 16,17 The Convention establishes Intangible Cultural Heritage Fund, the use of which is decided by the Committee.
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Original: Convention for the Safeguarding of  Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 25
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Original:  ” These measures include identification of the intangible cultural heritage that exists in its territory, adoption of appropriate policies, promotion of education and so on.
Revised:  " These measures include identification of the intangible cultural heritage that exists in its territory, adoption of appropriate policies, promotion of education and so on.
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Original:  each state parties must “ endeavor to ensure the widest possible participation of communities,
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Original:  groups, and, where appropriate, individuals that create, maintain and transmit such heritage, and to involve them actively in its management ” .Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 15 At the international level, this Convention promotes international cooperation, which includes “ the exchange of information and experience, joint initiatives, and the establishment of a mechanism of assistance ” to other State Parties.
Revised:  groups, and, where appropriate, individuals that create, maintain and transmit such heritage, and to involve them actively in its management " .Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 15 At the international level, this Convention promotes international cooperation, which includes “ the exchange of information and experience, joint initiatives, and the establishment of a mechanism of assistance ” to other State Parties.
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Original:  groups, and, where appropriate, individuals that create, maintain and transmit such heritage, and to involve them actively in its management ” .Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 15 At the international level, this Convention promotes international cooperation, which includes “ the exchange of information and experience, joint initiatives, and the establishment of a mechanism of assistance ” to other State Parties.
Revised:  groups, and, where appropriate, individuals that create, maintain and transmit such heritage, and to involve them actively in its management ” .Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 15 At the international level, this Convention promotes international cooperation, which includes " the exchange of information and experience, joint initiatives, and the establishment of a mechanism of assistance ” to other State Parties.
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