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Original:  This became his six win in the season after seven races complete to be the fifth driver in history after Alberto Ascari, Juan Manuel Fangio, Jim Clark and Michael Schumacher (twice).
Revised:  This became his six win in the season after seven races and became only the fifth driver in history after Alberto Ascari, Juan Manuel Fangio, Jim Clark and Michael Schumacher (twice).
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Original:  This became his six win in the season after seven races complete to be the fifth driver in history after Alberto Ascari, Juan Manuel Fangio, Jim Clark and Michael Schumacher (twice).
Revised:  This became his six win in the season after seven races complete to be the fifth driver to do so in history, after Alberto Ascari, Juan Manuel Fangio, Jim Clark and Michael Schumacher (twice).
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Original:  This spoiled the three pit-stop race strategy for Vettel who lost the second place to his teammate Mark Webber.
Revised:  This spoiled the three pit-stop race strategy for Vettel who then lost second place to his teammate Mark Webber.
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Original:  Button's teammate, Rubens Barrichello, had a poor start , damaged his car after several unsuccessful overtaking attempts and later leaved the race as is Giancarlo Fisicella (Force India).
Revised:  Button's teammate, Rubens Barrichello, had a poor start and damaged his car after several unsuccessful overtaking attempts and later leaved the race as is Giancarlo Fisicella (Force India).
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Original:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed the top eighth with one point in the race standings . Jenson Button now owns 61 points of 70 possible after 7 races in the Drivers' championship with Barrichello 26 and Vettel 32 points behind.
Revised:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed out the top eight . Jenson Button now owns 61 points of 70 possible after 7 races in the Drivers' championship with Barrichello 26 and Vettel 32 points behind.
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Original:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed the top eighth with one point in the race standings . Jenson Button now owns 61 points of 70 possible after 7 races in the Drivers' championship with Barrichello 26 and Vettel 32 points behind.
Revised:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed the top eighth with one point in the race standings . Jenson Button now has 61 points of 70 possible after 7 races in the Drivers' championship with Barrichello 26 and Vettel 32 points behind.
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Original:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed the top eighth with one point in the race standings . Jenson Button now owns 61 points of 70 possible after 7 races in the Drivers' championship with Barrichello 26 and Vettel 32 points behind.
Revised:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed the top eighth with one point in the race standings . Jenson Button now owns 61 points out of a possible 70 after 7 races in the Drivers' championship with Barrichello 26 and Vettel 32 points behind.
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Original:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed the top eighth with one point in the race standings . Jenson Button now owns 61 points of 70 possible after 7 races in the Drivers' championship with Barrichello 26 and Vettel 32 points behind.
Revised:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed the top eighth with one point in the race standings . Jenson Button now owns 61 points of 70 possible after 7 races in the Drivers' Championship with Barrichello on 26 and Vettel 32 points behind.
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Original:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed the top eighth with one point in the race standings . Jenson Button now owns 61 points of 70 possible after 7 races in the Drivers' championship with Barrichello 26 and Vettel 32 points behind.
Revised:  Trulli's teammate Timo Glock closed the top eighth with one point in the race standings . Jenson Button now owns 61 points of 70 possible after 7 races in the Drivers' championship with Barrichello 26 points and Vettel on 29.
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Original:  Brawn GP still dominates the Constructors' standings with 96, nearly 40 points ahead of Red Bull and even more ahead other teams
Revised:  Brawn GP still dominates the Constructors' standings with 96, nearly 40 points ahead of Red Bull Racing
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Original: File:Button Spain 2009.jpg|Jenson Button at the Spanish Grand Prix ]] Istanbul Park Brawn Mercedes driver Jenson Button won today 's FIA Formula One 2009 ING Turkish Grand Prix at the Istanbul Racing Circuit in Istanbul, Turkey.
Revised: File:Button Spain 2009.jpg|Jenson Button at the Spanish Grand Prix ]] Brawn Mercedes driver Jenson Button won today 's FIA Formula One 2009 ING Turkish Grand Prix at the Istanbul Racing Circuit in Istanbul, Turkey.
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Original:   Pole-sitter Sebastian Vettel (Red Bull-Renault) made a crucial error on the first lap by running wide and lost the lead to Button.
Revised:  Istanbul Park Pole-sitter Sebastian Vettel (Red Bull-Renault) made a crucial error on the first lap by running wide and lost the lead to Button.
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Original:  This has not been a donor conference where governments have been invited to come and make new pledges, as I said if everybody lived by their Paris pledges in December 2007, witch where tree year pledges, we are exactly half way in that we would have been more or less fine.
Revised:  This has not been a donor conference where governments have been invited to come and make new pledges, as I said if everybody lived by their Paris pledges in December 2007, which were three year pledges, we are exactly half way in that we would have been more or less fine.
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Original:  A new meeting has been scheduled for September in New York, New York in contraction with the general assembly
Revised:  A new meeting has been scheduled for September in New York, New York in conjuntion with the United Nations General Assembly
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Original: Earlier on the first day, both optimism and hope for the Palestinian situation was expressed by Norwegian Foreign Minister Jonas Gahr Støre and Palestinian Prime minister Salam Fayyad  .
Revised: Early on the first day, both optimism and hope for the Palestinian situation was expressed by Norwegian Foreign Minister Jonas Gahr Støre and Palestinian Prime minister Salam Fayyad .
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Original: Earlier on the first day, both optimism and hope for the Palestinian situation was expressed by Norwegian Foreign Minister Jonas Gahr Støre and Palestinian Prime minister Salam Fayyad  .
Revised: Earlier on the first day, Norwegian Foreign Minister Jonas Gahr Støre and Palestinian Prime minister Salam Fayyad .
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Original:  As for the unstable political situation in Palestine, Palestinian PM Fayyad explained that "the political instability is also a reason why we need more aid."
Revised:  As for the unstable political situation in Palestine, Prime Minister Fayyad explained that "the political instability is also a reason why we need more aid."
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Original:  Our donor aid is a political project aim[ed] at supporting and sustaining the Palestinian authorities , a key institution in what is supposed to become an independent Palestinian state.
Revised:  Our donor aid is a political project aim[ed] at supporting and sustaining the Palestinian Authority , a key institution in what is supposed to become an independent Palestinian state.
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Original:  Minister Støre continued stating that , "It’s very important to stress that without a political horizon what we do as donors becomes less meaningful.
Revised:  Minister Støre continued , stating , "It’s very important to stress that without a political horizon what we do as donors becomes less meaningful.
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Original:  You can leave that up to the financial crisis, but at the big donor conferences in Paris December 2007, and Sharm el-Sheikh February 2009 there where pledges enough to carry this through."
Revised:  You can leave that up to the financial crisis, but at the big donor conferences in Paris December 2007, and Sharm el-Sheikh February 2009 there were pledges enough to carry this through."
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Original:  On the question if the donor countries had offered to give any immediate financial relief, Minister Støre stated “This has to be stressed,  has not been a pledging conference.
Revised:  On the question if the donor countries had offered to give any immediate financial relief, Minister Støre said “This has to be stressed, has not been a pledging conference.
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Original:  On the question if the donor countries had offered to give any immediate financial relief, Minister Støre stated “This has to be stressed,  has not been a pledging conference.
Revised:  On the question if the donor countries had offered to give any immediate financial relief, Minister Støre stated “This has to be stressed, this has not been a pledging conference.
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Original:  This has not been a donor conference where governments have been invited to come and make new pledges, as I said if everybody lived by their Paris pledges in December 2007, which were three year pledges, we are exactly half way in that  we would have been more or less fine.
Revised:  This has not been a donor conference where governments have been invited to come and make new pledges, as I said if everybody lived by their Paris pledges in December 2007, which were three year pledges, we are exactly half way in that , we would have been more or less fine.
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Original:  But I think we have seen a fort coming approach by some delegations, I will not name them or put a figure on it but I think it follows from what the prime minister and I have together have expressed here that there is an urgent need.”
Revised:  But I think we have seen a forthcoming approach by some delegations, I will not name them or put a figure on it but I think it follows from what the prime minister and I have together have expressed here that there is an urgent need.”
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Original:  A new meeting has been scheduled for September in New York, New York in conjuntion with the United Nations General Assembly
Revised:  A new meeting has been scheduled for September in New York, New York in conjunction with the United Nations General Assembly
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Original:  When he stepped forward to make his victory speech, after the result had been declared, all other parties' candidates took the unusual step of leaving the stage 
Revised:  When he stepped forward to make his victory speech, after the result had been declared, all other parties' candidates took the unusual step of leaving the stage .
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Original:  When he stepped forward to make his victory speech, after the result had been declared, all other parties' candidates took the unusual step of leaving the stage .
Revised:  When he stepped forward to make his victory speech, after the result had been declared, all other parties' candidates took the unusual step of leaving the stage 
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Original:  When he stepped forward to make his victory speech, after the result had been declared, all other parties' candidates took the unusual step of leaving the stage  
Revised:  When he stepped forward to make his victory speech, after the result had been declared, all other parties' candidates took the unusual step of leaving the stage . 
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Original:  When he stepped forward to make his victory speech, after the result had been declared, all other parties' candidates took the unusual step of leaving the stage  
Revised:  When he stepped forward to make his victory speech, after the result had been declared, all other parties' candidates took the unusual step of leaving the stage Related new
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Original:  Nick Griffin Although the number of votes cast for the BNP in the North West England region in the 2009 election (132,094) was lower than the number of votes cast for the BNP (134,959) in the previous election in 2004, the percentage of the popular vote achieved by the BNP rose, from 6.4\% to 8.0\%, because of a lower overall voter turnout.
Revised:  North West England region in the 2009 election (132,094) was lower than the number of votes cast for the BNP (134,959) in the previous election in 2004, the percentage of the popular vote achieved by the BNP rose, from 6.4\% to 8.0\%, because of a lower overall voter turnout.
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Original: Nick Griffin Although the number of votes cast for the BNP in the The first members of parliament for the British National Party (BNP) were elected today, in the United Kingdom elections for the European Parliament.
Revised: Nick Griffin The first members of parliament for the British National Party (BNP) were elected today, in the United Kingdom elections for the European Parliament.
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Original:   North West England region in the 2009 election (132,094) was lower than the number of votes cast for the BNP (134,959) in the previous election in 2004, the percentage of the popular vote achieved by the BNP rose, from 6.4\% to 8.0\%, because of a lower overall voter turnout  .
Revised:  Although the number of votes cast for the BNP in the North West England region in the 2009 election (132,094) was lower than the number of votes cast for the BNP (134,959) in the previous election in 2004, the percentage of the popular vote achieved by the BNP rose, from 6.4\% to 8.0\%, because of a lower overall voter turnout .
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Original:  In the last four years,  Rafael Nadal has barred Federer from winning the only Grand Slam title that lacked from his collection.
Revised:  In the last four years, only Rafael Nadal has barred Federer from winning the only Grand Slam title that lacked from his collection.
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Original:  In the last four years,  Rafael Nadal has barred Federer from winning the only Grand Slam title that lacked from his collection.
Revised:  In the last four years, Rafael Nadal has stopped Federer from winning the only Grand Slam title that lacked from his collection.
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Original:  After the match, Söderling told that Federer was the "greatest player of all times" and that he gave him "a lesson of tennis ".
Revised:  After the match, Söderling said that Federer was the "greatest player of all times" and that he gave him "a lesson of tennis ".
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Original:  After the match, Söderling told that Federer was the "greatest player of all times" and that he gave him "a lesson of tennis ".
Revised:  After the match, Söderling told that Federer was the "greatest player of all times" and that Federer gave him "a lesson of tennis ".
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Original:  After the match, Söderling told that Federer was the "greatest player of all times" and that he gave him "a lesson of tennis ".
Revised:  After the match, Söderling told that Federer was the "greatest player of all times" and that he gave him "a lesson of tennis ."
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Original:  The next Grand Slam tournament is Winbledon in London and begins on June 22, 2009
Revised:  The next Grand Slam tournament is Wimbledon in London and begins on June 22, 2009
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Original:  He finaly clinched the tie-break 7-1 by shooting 4 aces.
Revised:  He finally clinched the tie-break 7-1 by shooting 4 aces.
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Original:  Since monday , he has 2070 points in advance.
Revised:  Since Monday , he has 2070 points in advance.
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Original:  By winning the tournament, Federer joins Pete Sampras with 14 Grand Slam tournament won and Andre Agassi, being the second men in the Open Era (since 1968) to clinch all four major tournaments.
Revised:  In winning this tournament, Federer joins Pete Sampras with 14 Grand Slam tournament won and Andre Agassi, being the second men in the Open Era (since 1968) to clinch all four major tournaments.
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Original:  By winning the tournament, Federer joins Pete Sampras with 14 Grand Slam tournament won and Andre Agassi, being the second men in the Open Era (since 1968) to clinch all four major tournaments.
Revised:  By winning the tournament, Federer joins Pete Sampras with 14 Grand Slam tournaments won and along with Andre Agassiis the second man in the Open Era (since 1968) to clinch all four major tournaments.
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Original:  In the last four years, only Rafael Nadal has stopped Federer from winning the French Grand Slam title that lacked from his collection.
Revised:  In the last four years, only Rafael Nadal has stopped Federer from winning the French Grand Slam title missing from his collection.
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Original:  The match occurred under bad weather conditions with light rain and great wind during the first two sets, a situation which became worse during the third.
Revised:  The match took place in bad weather conditions with light rain and great wind during the first two sets, a situation which became worse during the third.
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Original:  The match occurred under bad weather conditions with light rain and great wind during the first two sets, a situation which became worse during the third.
Revised:  The match occurred under bad weather conditions with light rain and strong winds during the first two sets, a situation which became worse during the third.
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Original:  In the second, he began to play better tennis and at 2-1, after the irruption of a man on court, Federer seemed to loose power.
Revised:  In the second, he began to play better tennis and at 2-1, after an interruption by a man on court, Federer seemed to loose power.
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Original:  In the second, he began to play better tennis and at 2-1, after the irruption of a man on court, Federer seemed to loose power.
Revised:  In the second, he began to play better tennis and at 2-1, after the irruption of a man on court, Federer seemed to lose power.
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Original:  He finally clinched the tie-break 7-1 by shooting 4 aces.
Revised:  He finally clinched the tie-break 7-1 by shooting four aces.
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Original:  In the 2009 ATP Ranking, Federer moves closer to Nadal after he lost to Söderling in the 4th round.
Revised:  In the 2009 ATP Ranking, Federer moves closer to Nadal after he lost to Söderling in the fourth round.
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Original:  Before the tournament, Nadal had  4500 points in advance . Since Monday, he has  2070 points in advance .
Revised:  Before the tournament, Nadal had a 4500 points in advance . Since Monday, he has 2070 points in advance .
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Original:  Before the tournament, Nadal had  4500 points in advance . Since Monday, he has  2070 points in advance .
Revised:  Before the tournament, Nadal had 4500 points lead . Since Monday, he has 2070 points in advance .
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Original:  Before the tournament, Nadal had  4500 points in advance . Since Monday, he has  2070 points in advance .
Revised:  Before the tournament, Nadal had 4500 points in advance . Since Monday, he has a 2070 points in advance .
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Original:  Before the tournament, Nadal had  4500 points in advance . Since Monday, he has  2070 points in advance .
Revised:  Before the tournament, Nadal had 4500 points in advance . Since Monday, he has 2070 point lead .
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Original:  The senate's president is Rose Francine Rogombe from the Gabonese Democratic Party.
Revised:  The senate's president is Francine Ragombe from the Gabonese Democratic Party.
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Original:  The senate's president is Francine Ragombe from the Gabonese Democratic Party.
Revised:  The senate's president is Rose Francine Rogombe from the Gabonese Democratic Party.
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Original:  Teams of Brazilian Navy and Air Force members recover wreckage from Air France Flight AF447.
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Original: Teams of Brazilian Navy and Air Force members recover wreckage from Air France Flight AF447.
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Original:  We saw a minibus thrown about five meters (yards) into the air, then come down in flames," said a witness, one Omar Abdul-Ghafar, who is a university student  waiting for another bus  .
Revised:  We saw a minibus thrown about five meters (yards) into the air, then come down in flames," said a witness, one Omar Abdul-Ghafar, who is a university student that was waiting for another bus .
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Original:  She went to a local medical office to receive an x-ray on her ankle.
Revised:  She went to a local medical office , where an x-ray on her ankle.
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Original:  She has been limping on her bad ankle  but otherwise seems to be okay.
Revised:  She has been limping on her bad ankle , but otherwise seems to be okay.
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Original:  A senator signed her cast and another senator had a pillow and a bag of ice ready for Sotomayer.
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Original: Image:Obama and Sotomayor.jpg|Sotomayor with US president Barack Obama]]  U.S. Supreme Court nominee Sonia Sotomayor fractured her ankle after stumbling on her way to be seated aboard her airplane to Washington, D.C at Laguardia Airport on Monday, fracturing her right ankle.
Revised: Image:Obama and Sotomayor.jpg|Sotomayor with US president Barack Obama]] U.S. Supreme Court nominee , fractured her ankle after stumbling on her way to be seated aboard her airplane to Washington, D.C at Laguardia Airport on Monday, fracturing her right ankle.
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Original:  She went to a local medical office, where an x-ray was taken.
Revised:  She was sent to a local medical office, where an x-ray was taken.
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Original:  She went to a local medical office, where an x-ray was taken.
Revised:  She went to a local medical office, where an X-ray was taken.
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Original:  She has met with 1/3 of the senate in just four days.
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Original:  I think she spent a couple of hours getting the cast, and the last time I saw video, (she was) up on Capitol Hill continuing to meet with senators as part of her meetings surrounding her nomination," said White House press secretary Robert Gibbs .
Revised:  I think she spent a couple of hours getting the cast, and the last time I saw video, (she was) up on Capitol Hill continuing to meet with senators as part of her meetings surrounding her nomination," said White House press secretary Robert Gibbs 
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Original:  Former First Lady Laura Bush congratulated Sotomayor on getting picked by President Barack Obama to be on the Supreme Court
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Original: Apple has launched a new faster phone, with an improved camera .
Revised: Apple launched a new faster phone, with an improved camera .
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Original:  The iPhone 3G S was today unveiled at the company's Worldwide Developer Conference in San Francisco, where updates to the popular operating system Leopard were also released.
Revised:  The iPhone 3G S at their Worldwide Developer Conference in San Francisco, where updates to the popular operating system Leopard were also released.
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Original:   The phone has an upgraded camera, coming in at 3.2 megapixels, which also allows users to record video .
Revised:  The phone has an upgraded 3.2 megapixels, which also allows users to record video .
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Original:   The phone has an upgraded camera, coming in at 3.2 megapixels, which also allows users to record video .
Revised:  The phone has an upgraded camera, coming in at 3.2 megapixel camera which supports video recording .
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Original:  Apple unveiled the new iPhone 3G S at their Worldwide Developer Conference in San Francisco, where updates to the popular operating system Leopard were also released .
Revised:  Apple today announced its latest iteration of their popular iPhone, the iPhone 3G S at their Worldwide Developer Conference in San Francisco, where updates to the popular operating system Leopard were also released .
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Original:  Apple unveiled the new iPhone 3G S at their Worldwide Developer Conference in San Francisco, where updates to the popular operating system Leopard were also released .
Revised:  Apple unveiled the new iPhone 3G S .
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