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Original:  This will then allow granulation to occur over a few weeks  with the subsequent ability to place a split-thickness skin graft (STSG) on top for coverage.
Revised:  This will then allow granulation to occur over a few weeks , with the subsequent ability to place a split-thickness skin graft (STSG) on top for coverage.
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Original:  These patients will clearly have a hernia that will need to be fixed 9 – 12 months down the line . Resuscitation The process of damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
Revised:  These patients clearly have a hernia that will need to be fixed 9 – 12 months down the line . Resuscitation The process of damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
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Original:  These patients will clearly have a hernia that will need to be fixed 9 – 12 months down the line . Resuscitation The process of damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
Revised:  These patients will clearly have a hernia that must be fixed 9 – 12 months down the line . Resuscitation The process of damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
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Original:  These patients will clearly have a hernia that will need to be fixed 9 – 12 months down the line . Resuscitation The process of damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
Revised:  These patients will clearly have a hernia that will need to be fixed 9 to 12 months down the line . Resuscitation The process of damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
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Original:  These patients will clearly have a hernia that will need to be fixed 9 – 12 months down the line . Resuscitation The process of damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
Revised:  These patients will clearly have a hernia that will need to be fixed 9 – 12 months later . Resuscitation The process of damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
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Original:  These patients will clearly have a hernia that will need to be fixed 9 – 12 months down the line . Resuscitation The process of damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
Revised:  These patients will clearly have a hernia that will need to be fixed 9 – 12 months down the line . Resuscitation Damage control resuscitation has had a dramatic impact on how care for critically ill patients is administered..
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Original:  The resuscitation period allows for any physiologic derangements to be reversed in order to give the best outcome for patient care.
Revised:  The resuscitation period lets any physiologic derangements to be reversed in order to give the best outcome for patient care.
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Original:  The resuscitation period allows for any physiologic derangements to be reversed in order to give the best outcome for patient care.
Revised:  The resuscitation period allows for any physiologic derangements be reversed to give the best outcome for patient care.
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Original:  The term permissive hypotension refers to maintaining a low blood pressure in order to mitigate hemorrhage;
Revised:  The term permissive hypotension refers to maintaining a low blood pressure to mitigate hemorrhage;
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Original:  In order to help mitigate confounding variables a randomized control trial called the Pragmatic Randomized Optimal Platelet and Plasma Ratios (PROPPR) is being performed to evaluate the transfusion requirement.
Revised:  To help mitigate confounding variables a randomized control trial called the Pragmatic Randomized Optimal Platelet and Plasma Ratios (PROPPR) is being performed to evaluate the transfusion requirement.
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Original:  In fact data would suggest that around 25\% of patients will arrive having coagulopathy.
Revised:  In fact , data suggests that around 25\% of patients will arrive having coagulopathy.
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Original:  In fact data would suggest that around 25\% of patients will arrive having coagulopathy.
Revised:  In fact data would suggest that around 25\% of patients arrive having coagulopathy.
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Original:  In order for trauma teams to be able to systematically and efficiently deliver blood products institutions have created protocols that allow for this.
Revised:  For trauma teams to be able to systematically and efficiently deliver blood products institutions have created protocols that allow for this.
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Original:  In order for trauma teams to be able to systematically and efficiently deliver blood products institutions have created protocols that allow for this.
Revised:  In order for trauma teams to systematically and efficiently deliver blood products institutions have created protocols that allow for this.
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Original:  This was the first article that brought together the concept of limiting operative time in these critically ill patients in order to allow for reversal of physiologic insults that resulted in improved survival.
Revised:  This was the first article that brought together the concept of limiting operative time in these critically ill patients to allow for reversal of physiologic insults that resulted in improved survival.
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Original:  This was the first article that brought together the concept of limiting operative time in these critically ill patients in order to allow for reversal of physiologic insults that resulted in improved survival.
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Original:  Lampung Sakti F.C. Category:
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Original:  Assembled players take an oath to spend at least an hour participating in the yet-to-be-determined taskGC (2001).
Revised:  Assembled players take an oath to spend at least an hour participating in the yet-to-be-determined task,GC (2001).
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Original:  "Spotlight On...", The Pendulum, #9. , which unlike other roleplaying games is not an imaginary or simulated activity, but a real-world mission.
Revised:  "Spotlight On...", The Pendulum, #9. which unlike other roleplaying games is not an imaginary or simulated activity, but a real-world mission.
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Original: Morton's List is a game published by Dark Carnival Games, LLC.Bruce, Robert;
Revised: Morton's List was a game published by Dark Carnival Games, LLC.Bruce, Robert;
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Original:  Dark Carnival Games. . It is a "Random Reality" game in which players participate in a randomly generated task or activity.
Revised:  Dark Carnival Games. . It was a "Random Reality" game in which players participate in a randomly generated task or activity.
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Original:  Dark Carnival Games. . It is a "Random Reality" game in which players participate in a randomly generated task or activity.
Revised:  Dark Carnival Games. . It is a "Random Reality" game in which players participated in a randomly generated task or activity.
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Original:  Description Morton's List is presented as a 402-page book.
Revised:  Description Morton's List was presented as a 402-page book.
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Original:  Controversy Morton's List claims to include any possible activity that people might do for fun.
Revised:  Controversy Morton's List claimed to include any possible activity that people might do for fun.
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Original: Morton's List was a game published by Dark Carnival Games, LLC.Bruce, Robert;
Revised: Morton's List is a game published by Dark Carnival Games, LLC.Bruce, Robert;
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Original:  Dark Carnival Games. . It was a "Random Reality" game in which players participated in a randomly generated task or activity.
Revised:  Dark Carnival Games. . It is a "Random Reality" game in which players participated in a randomly generated task or activity.
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Original:  Dark Carnival Games. . It was a "Random Reality" game in which players participated in a randomly generated task or activity.
Revised:  Dark Carnival Games. . It was a "Random Reality" game in which players participate in a randomly generated task or activity.
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Original:  Description Morton's List was presented as a 402-page book.
Revised:  Description Morton's List is presented as a 402-page book.
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Original:  Controversy Morton's List claimed to include any possible activity that people might do for fun.
Revised:  Controversy Morton's List claims to include any possible activity that people might do for fun.
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Original:  Withdrawal Physical copies of the book were withdrawn from sale at the end of 2012, and all unsold copies of the game were ceremonially burnt.
Revised:  Withdrawal Physical copies of the book were withdrawn from sale at the end of 2012.
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Original:  The official website now features a freely downloadable "lite" version of the game.
Revised:  The official website now features a freely downloadable version of the game.
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Original: Propaganda movie "Kita Bakal Menang" produced for the Dutch colonial government, written and directed by Andjar Asmara Category:
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Original: Andjar asmara became a writer for the theatrical troupe Dardanella in November 1930, working under the group's founder Willy A. Piedro.
Revised: Andjar became a writer for the theatrical troupe Dardanella in November 1930, working under the group's founder Willy A. Piedro.
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Original:  The expression do not exclude people who even enjoys champagne, caviar or posh music, but the term is still focused on the simple way of life.
Revised:  The expression does not exclude people who even enjoys champagne, caviar or posh music, but the term is still focused on the simple way of life.
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Original:  The expression do not exclude people who even enjoys champagne, caviar or posh music, but the term is still focused on the simple way of life.
Revised:  The expression do not exclude people who enjoy champagne, caviar or posh music, but the term is still focused on the simple way of life.
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Original:  A person living this way me be called a livskunstner.
Revised:  A person living this way could be called a livskunstner.
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Original:  Замок.jpg|Palace of Princess Anastasia Gagarina — now the administrative centre of the sanatorium "Utyos", located in the seaside town of Utyos, in Crimea, Russia .]] In Russia, Ukraine, and other former Soviet Union republics, the term sanatorium is generally used for a combination resort/recreational facility and a medical facility to provide short-term complex rest and medical services.
Revised:  Замок.jpg|Palace of Princess Anastasia Gagarina — now the administrative centre of the sanatorium "Utyos", located in the seaside town of Utyos, in Crimea, Ukraine .]] In Russia, Ukraine, and other former Soviet Union republics, the term sanatorium is generally used for a combination resort/recreational facility and a medical facility to provide short-term complex rest and medical services.
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Original:  It is similar to spa resorts  with medical services.
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Original:  On the other hand, for most Eastern Europeans including Russians, Ukrainians, Czechs, and other national cultures  sanatorium mostly means a kind of hotel with health resort facilities and various available services (such as massage, pools, saunas, aromatherapy, oxygenotherapy , etc.) not covered by medical insurance.
Revised:  On the other hand, for most Eastern Europeans including Russians, Ukrainians, Czechs, and other national cultures , sanatorium mostly means a kind of hotel with health resort facilities and various available services (such as massage, pools, saunas, aromatherapy, oxygenotherapy , etc.) not covered by medical insurance.
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Original:  On the other hand, for most Eastern Europeans including Russians, Ukrainians, Czechs, and other national cultures  sanatorium mostly means a kind of hotel with health resort facilities and various available services (such as massage, pools, saunas, aromatherapy, oxygenotherapy , etc.) not covered by medical insurance.
Revised:  On the other hand, for most Eastern Europeans including Russians, Ukrainians, Czechs, and other national cultures sanatorium mostly means a kind of hotel with health resort facilities and various available services (such as massage, pools, saunas, aromatherapy, oxygen therapy , etc.) not covered by medical insurance.
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Original:  It is mostly  without any double connotation is a spa resort where relatively healthy business people can rest and recuperate well-being during a regular job vacation.
Revised:  It is mostly , without any double connotation is a spa resort where relatively healthy business people can rest and recuperate well-being during a regular job vacation.
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Original:  It is mostly  without any double connotation is a spa resort where relatively healthy business people can rest and recuperate well-being during a regular job vacation.
Revised:  It is mostly without any double connotation , a spa resort where relatively healthy business people can rest and recuperate well-being during a regular job vacation.
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Original:  It is mostly  without any double connotation is a spa resort where relatively healthy business people can rest and recuperate well-being during a regular job vacation.
Revised:  It is mostly without any double connotation is a spa resort where relatively healthy people can rest and recuperate well-being during a regular job vacation.
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Original:  It is mostly  without any double connotation is a spa resort where relatively healthy business people can rest and recuperate well-being during a regular job vacation.
Revised:  It is mostly without any double connotation is a spa resort where relatively healthy business people can rest and recuperate during a regular job vacation.
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Original:  For example, Sanatorium Astória Sanatorium Astória and others located in Karlovy Vary  Czech Republic, or Geneva Sanatorium Hotel in Ukraine may serve the purpose.
Revised:  For example, Sanatorium Astória Sanatorium Astória and others located in Karlovy Vary , Czech Republic, or Geneva Sanatorium Hotel in Ukraine may serve the purpose.
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Original:  For example, Sanatorium Astória Sanatorium Astória and others located in Karlovy Vary  Czech Republic, or Geneva Sanatorium Hotel in Ukraine may serve the purpose.
Revised:  For example, Sanatorium Astória Sanatorium Astória and others located in Karlovy Vary Czech Republic, or Geneva Sanatorium Hotel in Ukraine , serve this purpose.
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Original:  However, a general practitioner is available and recommended for guests to check their health status in the beginning and at the end of their staying in a hotel .
Revised:  However, a general practitioner is available and it is recommended guests check their health status in the beginning and at the end of their staying in a hotel .
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Original:  However, a general practitioner is available and recommended for guests to check their health status in the beginning and at the end of their staying in a hotel .
Revised:  However, a general practitioner is available and recommended for guests to check their health status at the beginning and at the end of their staying in a hotel .
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Original:  However, a general practitioner is available and recommended for guests to check their health status in the beginning and at the end of their staying in a hotel .
Revised:  However, a general practitioner is available and recommended for guests to check their health status in the beginning and end of their staying in a hotel .
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Original:  However, a general practitioner is available and recommended for guests to check their health status in the beginning and at the end of their staying in a hotel .
Revised:  However, a general practitioner is available and recommended for guests to check their health status in the beginning and at the end of their stay .
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Original:  In How the Universe got its Spots, (pp. 63-70 ), physicist Janna Levin describes a scientific meeting in a sanatorium near Moscow at the end of 1999.
Revised:  In How the Universe got its Spots, (pp. 63–70 ), physicist Janna Levin describes a scientific meeting in a sanatorium near Moscow at the end of 1999.
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Original: On the other hand, for most Eastern Europeans including Russians, Ukrainians, Czechs, and other national cultures , sanatorium mostly means a kind of hotel with health resort facilities and various available services (such as massage, pools, saunas, aromatherapy, oxygen therapy, etc.) not covered by medical insurance.
Revised: On the other hand, for most Slavs, including Russians, Ukrainians, Czechs, and other national cultures , sanatorium mostly means a kind of hotel with health resort facilities and various available services (such as massage, pools, saunas, aromatherapy, oxygen therapy, etc.) not covered by medical insurance.
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Original: On the other hand, for most Eastern Europeans including Russians, Ukrainians, Czechs, and other national cultures , sanatorium mostly means a kind of hotel with health resort facilities and various available services (such as massage, pools, saunas, aromatherapy, oxygen therapy, etc.) not covered by medical insurance.
Revised: On the other hand, for most Eastern Europeans including Russians, Ukrainians, Czechs, and other ethnic groups , sanatorium mostly means a kind of hotel with health resort facilities and various available services (such as massage, pools, saunas, aromatherapy, oxygen therapy, etc.) not covered by medical insurance.
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Original:  Замок.jpg|Palace of Princess Anastasia Gagarina — now the administrative centre of the sanatorium "Utyos", located in the seaside town of Utyos, in Crimea, Ukraine .]] In Russia, Ukraine, and other former Soviet Union republics, the term sanatorium is generally used for a combination resort/recreational facility and a medical facility to provide short-term complex rest and medical services.
Revised:  Замок.jpg|Palace of Princess Anastasia Gagarina — now the administrative centre of the sanatorium "Utyos", located in the seaside town of Utyos, in Crimea, Russia .]] In Russia, Ukraine, and other former Soviet Union republics, the term sanatorium is generally used for a combination resort/recreational facility and a medical facility to provide short-term complex rest and medical services.
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Original:  Замок.jpg|Palace of Princess Anastasia Gagarina — now the administrative centre of the sanatorium "Utyos", located in the seaside town of Utyos, in Crimea , Ukraine .]] In Russia, Ukraine, and other former Soviet Union republics, the term sanatorium is generally used for a combination resort/recreational facility and a medical facility to provide short-term complex rest and medical services.
Revised:  Замок.jpg|Palace of Princess Anastasia Gagarina — now the administrative centre of the sanatorium "Utyos", located in the seaside town of Utyos, in Crimea .]] In Russia, Ukraine, and other former Soviet Union republics, the term sanatorium is generally used for a combination resort/recreational facility and a medical facility to provide short-term complex rest and medical services.
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Original:  born 1954) is an Egyptian businessman and politician who has been serving as the minister of tourism since 2012.
Revised:  born 1954) is an Egyptian businessman and politician who has been serving as the minister of tourism .
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Original:  This abstraction process takes an element of information about the properties of a subject  and conceives it to consist in the relation between a subject and another subject.
Revised:  This abstraction process takes an element of information about the properties of a subject , and conceives it to consist in the relation between a subject and another subject.
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Original:  This abstraction process takes an element of information about the properties of a subject  and conceives it to consist in the relation between a subject and another subject.
Revised:  This abstraction process takes an element of information about the properties of a subject and conceives it to consist in the relation between the original subject and the property seen as a second subject.
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Original: Hypostatic abstraction in mathematical logic, also known as hypostasis or subjectal abstraction, is a formal operation that transforms a propositional formula from an assertion to a relation , for example "Honey is sweet" is transformed into "Honey has sweetness".
Revised: Hypostatic abstraction in mathematical logic, also known as hypostasis or subjectal abstraction, is a formal operation that transforms an assertion to a relation , for example "Honey is sweet" is transformed into "Honey has sweetness".
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Original: Hypostatic abstraction in mathematical logic, also known as hypostasis or subjectal abstraction, is a formal operation that transforms a propositional formula from an assertion to a relation , for example "Honey is sweet" is transformed into "Honey has sweetness".
Revised: Hypostatic abstraction in mathematical logic, also known as hypostasis or subjectal abstraction, is a formal operation that transforms a propositional formula from an assertion to a relation ; for example "Honey is sweet" is transformed into "Honey has sweetness".
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Original:  Hypostasis changes a proposition of the form X is Y to another one of the form X has the property of being Y or X has Y-ness.
Revised:  Hypostasis changes a a propositional formula of the form X is Y to another one of the form X has the property of being Y or X has Y-ness.
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Original:  for example "Honey is sweet" is transformed into "Honey has sweetness".
Revised:  for example "Honey is sweet" is transformed into "Honey possesses sweetness".
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Original:  Hypostasis changes a a propositional formula of the form X is Y to another one of the form X has the property of being Y or X has Y-ness.
Revised:  Hypostasis changes a propositional formula of the form X is Y to another one of the form X has the property of being Y or X has Y-ness.
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Original:  This abstraction process takes an element of information about the properties of a subject, and conceives it to consist in the relation between the original subject and the property seen as a second subject .
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Original:  The existence of the latter subject, here Y-ness , consists solely in the truth of those propositions that have the corresponding concrete term , here Y , as the predicate.
Revised:  The logical functioning of the second subject Y-ness , consists solely in the truth of those propositions that have the corresponding concrete term , here Y , as the predicate.
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Original:  The existence of the latter subject, here Y-ness , consists solely in the truth of those propositions that have the corresponding concrete term , here Y , as the predicate.
Revised:  The existence of the latter subject, here Y-ness consists solely in the truth of those propositions that have the corresponding concrete term , here Y , as the predicate.
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