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Original:  Implementation Phase 2 – Epidemiological, Behavioral%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Environmental Diagnosis Phase 6 – Process Evaluation Phase 3 – Educational Ecological Diagnosis Phase 7 – Impact Evaluation Phase 4 – Administrative%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Policy Diagnosis Phase 8 – Outcome Evaluation Phase 1 – social diagnosis The first stage in the program planning phase deals with identifying and evaluating the social problems that affect the quality of life of a population of interest.
Revised:  Implementation Phase 2 – Epidemiological, Behavioral%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Environmental Diagnosis Phase 6 – Process Evaluation Phase 3 – Educational Ecological Diagnosis Phase 7 – Impact Evaluation Phase 4 – Administrative%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Phase 1 – social diagnosis The first stage in the program planning phase deals with identifying and evaluating the social problems that affect the quality of life of a population of interest.
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Original:  Boston: Jones Bartlett Publishers, pp. 589–620%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Administrative diagnosis assesses policies, resources, circumstances and prevailing organizational situations that could hinder or facilitate the development of the health program.
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Original:  Boston: Jones Bartlett Publishers, pp. 589–620%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Administrative diagnosis assesses policies, resources, circumstances and prevailing organizational situations that could hinder or facilitate the development of the health program.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Phase 5 – implementation of the program Phase 6 – process evaluation This phase is used to evaluate the process by which the program is being implemented.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Conclusion The PRECEDE–PROCEED model is a participatory model for creating successful community health promotion and other public health interventions.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bibliography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Green, L.W., Kreuter, M.W., Deeds, S.G., Partridge, K.B. (1980).
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Original:  This may require not only educational interventions, but also additional strategies such as influencing the behaviors of a school's food service managers .
Revised:  This may require not only educational interventions, but also additional strategies such as influencing the behaviors of a school's food service managers 
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Original:  The behavioral ascertainment of a health issue is understood, firstly, through those behaviors that exemplify the severity of the disease (e.g . tobacco use among teenagers);
Revised:  The behavioral ascertainment of a health issue is understood, firstly, through those behaviors that exemplify the severity of the disease (e.g tobacco use among teenagers);
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Original: Life and career Dawid van Lill was born in Namibia in 1957.
Revised: Life and career Dawid van Lill was born in South-West Africa (Namibia) in 1957.
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Original:  In 2000 and 2001, Think Media provided the questions and scripts for quiz programmes such as 100\%, Blitsvinnig, and Vat ’ n Kans!
Revised:  In 2000 and 2001, Think Media provided the questions and scripts for quiz programmes such as 100\%, Blitsvinnig, and Vat ' n Kans!
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Original:  They also compiled questions for the M-Net sports quiz programme Going for Gold, as well as for two series of the SABC 3 quiz show Greed, e.tv ’ s Mahala on e and he was a consultant and researcher for SABC2 ’ s Flinkdink and SABC3 ’ s Weakest Link.
Revised:  They also compiled questions for the M-Net sports quiz programme Going for Gold, as well as for two series of the SABC 3 quiz show Greed, e.tv ' s Mahala on e and he was a consultant and researcher for SABC2 ’ s Flinkdink and SABC3 ’ s Weakest Link.
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Original:  They also compiled questions for the M-Net sports quiz programme Going for Gold, as well as for two series of the SABC 3 quiz show Greed, e.tv ’ s Mahala on e and he was a consultant and researcher for SABC2 ’ s Flinkdink and SABC3 ’ s Weakest Link.
Revised:  They also compiled questions for the M-Net sports quiz programme Going for Gold, as well as for two series of the SABC 3 quiz show Greed, e.tv ’ s Mahala on e and he was a consultant and researcher for SABC2 ' s Flinkdink and SABC3 ’ s Weakest Link.
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Original:  They also compiled questions for the M-Net sports quiz programme Going for Gold, as well as for two series of the SABC 3 quiz show Greed, e.tv ’ s Mahala on e and he was a consultant and researcher for SABC2 ’ s Flinkdink and SABC3 ’ s Weakest Link.
Revised:  They also compiled questions for the M-Net sports quiz programme Going for Gold, as well as for two series of the SABC 3 quiz show Greed, e.tv ’ s Mahala on e and he was a consultant and researcher for SABC2 ’ s Flinkdink and SABC3 ' s Weakest Link.
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Original:  He also collects books on everything and anything that will enrich one ’ s general knowledge repertoire.
Revised:  He also collects books on everything and anything that will enrich one ' s general knowledge repertoire.
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Original:  Editor 1993 Daan Retief Die Groot Familievasvraboek 1998 Human & Rousseau The Big Family Quiz Book 1998 Human & Rousseau Wat ’
Revised:  Editor 1993 Daan Retief Die Groot Familievasvraboek 1998 Human & Rousseau The Big Family Quiz Book 1998 Human & Rousseau Wat '
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Original:  n Vraag! 2001 Human & Rousseau Fassinerende Feite 2000 LAPA Publishers Van Lill ’
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Original:  s South African Miscellany 2004 Zebra Press Van Lill se Suid-Afrikaanse Trivia 2004 Zebra Press Wonderlike Afrika 2004 LAPA Publishers Amazing Africa 2007 LAPA Publishers Van Lill ’
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Original:  Black has responded (in "Smokestack Lightning," reprinted in "Friendly Fire") that of all, most important tasks can be rendered ludic , or "salvaged" by being turned into game-like and craft-like activities, and secondly that the vast majority of work does not need doing at all.
Revised:  Black has responded that most important tasks can be rendered ludic , or "salvaged" by being turned into game-like and craft-like activities, and secondly that the vast majority of work does not need doing at all.
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Original:  Black has responded (in "Smokestack Lightning," reprinted in "Friendly Fire") that of all, most important tasks can be rendered ludic , or "salvaged" by being turned into game-like and craft-like activities, and secondly that the vast majority of work does not need doing at all.
Revised:  Black has responded (in "Smokestack Lightning," reprinted in "Friendly Fire") that of all, most important tasks can be rendered ludic or "salvaged" by being turned into game-like and craft-like activities, and secondly that the vast majority of work does not need doing at all.
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Original:  The essay's critique of work formed the basis for the antilabour faction in Sterling's celebrated 1988 novel Islands in the Net.
Revised:  The essay's critique of work formed the basis for the antilabour faction in Sterling's 1988 novel Islands in the Net.
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Original:  Attacking Marxist state socialism as much as Liberal capitalism, Black argues that the only way for humans to be free is to reclaim their time from jobs and employment, instead turning necessary subsistence tasks into free play done voluntarily – an approach referred to as "ludic".
Revised:  Attacking Marxist state socialism as much as liberal capitalism, Black argues that the only way for humans to be free is to reclaim their time from jobs and employment, instead turning necessary subsistence tasks into free play done voluntarily – an approach referred to as "ludic".
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Original: Anti-work  Post-work society  Issues in anarchism He who does not work, neither shall he eat  Workers of the world, unite!
Revised: Anti-work Post-work society Issues in anarchism He who does not work, neither shall he eat Wage slavery Workers of the world, unite!
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Original:  In the September/October 1995 issue of Mother Jones, Maya Sinha praised the essay's provocative contention, paying particular note to Black's observation that much of what is termed "free time" is consumed by efforts related to facilitating or recovering from work itself.
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Original: Resignation Unable to withstand the pressure, he submitted his resignation to SCAF on 21 November 2011, just 6 days ahead of the much anticipated  Egyptian parliamentary election , 2011–2012.
Revised: Resignation Unable to withstand the pressure, he submitted his resignation to SCAF on 21 November 2011, just 6 days ahead of the much anticipated Egyptian parliamentary election .
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Original: In 2020, Sharaf was elected a member of the National Academy of Engineering for leadership to modernize transportation systems in Egypt and the Middle East through scholarship, advocacy, and public policy.
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Original: LGBT singers from the United States Category:American people of Dutch descent Category:American people of Indonesian descent Category:American people of Dutch-Indonesian descent Category:American people of Minangkabau descent Category:American drag queens of Asian descent Category:Minangkabau people Raja  Category:People from Baldwin Park, California Category:Artists from Los Angeles Category:LGBT American people of Asian descent Category:LGBT people from Californ
Revised: LGBT singers from the United States Category:American people of Dutch descent Category:American people of Indonesian descent Category:American people of Dutch-Indonesian descent Category:American people of Minangkabau descent Category:American drag queens of Asian descent Category:Minangkabau people Raja Raja Category:People from Baldwin Park, California Category:Artists from Los Angeles Category:LGBT American people of Asian descent Category:LGBT people from Californ
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Original: LGBT singers from the United States Category:American people of Dutch descent Category:American people of Indonesian descent Category:American people of Dutch-Indonesian descent Category:American people of Minangkabau descent Category:American drag queens of Asian descent Category:Minangkabau people Raja Raja Category:People from Baldwin Park, California Category:Artists from Los Angeles Category:LGBT American people of Asian descent Category:LGBT people from Californ
Revised: LGBT singers from the United States Category:American people of Dutch descent Category:American people of Indonesian descent Category:American people of Dutch-Indonesian descent Category:American people of Minangkabau descent Category:American drag queens of Asian descent Category:Minangkabau people Raja Category:People from Baldwin Park, California Category:Artists from Los Angeles Category:LGBT American people of Asian descent Category:LGBT people from Californ
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Original:  (born June 14, 1974), often shortened to Sutan Amrull, is an American drag performer and make-up artist who operates under the stage name Raja Gemini.
Revised:  (born June 14, 1974), often shortened to Sutan Amrull, is an American drag performer and make-up artist who uses the stage name Raja Gemini.
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Original:  He is best known as the winner of Season 3 of RuPaul's Drag Race (As of 2021, he is the only Asian American , not to mention Indonesian, that won the competition), and also for his work on the reality television show America's Next Top Model , serving as the show's makeup artist for nine cycles ( four through twelve).
Revised:  He is best known for winning Season 3 of RuPaul's Drag Race (As of 2021, he is the only Asian American , not to mention Indonesian, that won the competition), and also for his work on the reality television show America's Next Top Model , serving as the show's makeup artist for nine cycles ( four through twelve).
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Original:  He is best known as the winner of Season 3 of RuPaul's Drag Race (As of 2021, he is the only Asian American , not to mention Indonesian, that won the competition), and also for his work on the reality television show America's Next Top Model , serving as the show's makeup artist for nine cycles ( four through twelve).
Revised:  He is best known as the winner of Season 3 of RuPaul's Drag Race (As of 2021, he is the only Asian American to win the show. He is also known for his makeup artistry on the reality television show America's Next Top Model , serving as the show's makeup artist for nine cycles ( four through twelve).
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Original:  He is best known as the winner of Season 3 of RuPaul's Drag Race (As of 2021, he is the only Asian American , not to mention Indonesian, that won the competition), and also for his work on the reality television show America's Next Top Model , serving as the show's makeup artist for nine cycles ( four through twelve).
Revised:  He is best known as the winner of Season 3 of RuPaul's Drag Race (As of 2021, he is the only Asian American , not to mention Indonesian, that won the competition), and also for his work on the reality television show America's Next Top Model (cycles four through twelve).
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Original:  At the age of three  his family moved to Indonesia (where his parentsare from) and stayed there for six years before returning to the U.S.
Revised:  At the age of three , his family moved to Indonesia (where his parentsare from) and stayed there for six years before returning to the U.S.
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Original:  At the age of three  his family moved to Indonesia (where his parentsare from) and stayed there for six years before returning to the U.S.
Revised:  At the age of three his family moved to Indonesia , his parents' native country, where they stayed for six years before returning to the U.S.
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Original:  The increase in risk may be associated with duration of ADT. Receiving ADT has also been linked to experiencing poorer mental well-being.
Revised:  The increase in risk may be associated with duration of ADT. 
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Original:  The synthesis of testosterone is mediated by a chain of processes that start in our brain.
Revised:  The synthesis of testosterone is mediated by a chain of processes that start in the brain.
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Original:  When our body detects a low level of testosterone, the hypothalamus starts to produce LHRH , a hormone which, once is received by the pituitary gland activates the synthesis of LH (Luteinizing hormone)  . LH travels to the testicles where it induces the formation of testosterone . Prostate Cancer Guide There are two methods of androgen deprivation therapy based on drugs.
Revised:  When the body detects a low level of testosterone, the hypothalamus starts to produce LHRH , a hormone which, once is received by the pituitary gland activates the synthesis of LH (Luteinizing hormone) . LH travels to the testicles where it induces the formation of testosterone . Prostate Cancer Guide There are two methods of androgen deprivation therapy based on drugs.
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Original:  When our body detects a low level of testosterone, the hypothalamus starts to produce LHRH , a hormone which, once is received by the pituitary gland activates the synthesis of LH (Luteinizing hormone)  . LH travels to the testicles where it induces the formation of testosterone . Prostate Cancer Guide There are two methods of androgen deprivation therapy based on drugs.
Revised:  When our body detects a low level of testosterone, the hypothalamus starts to produce LHRH . LHRH activates the synthesis of LH (Luteinizing hormone) . LH travels to the testicles where it induces the formation of testosterone . Prostate Cancer Guide There are two methods of androgen deprivation therapy based on drugs.
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Original:  When our body detects a low level of testosterone, the hypothalamus starts to produce LHRH , a hormone which, once is received by the pituitary gland activates the synthesis of LH (Luteinizing hormone)  . LH travels to the testicles where it induces the formation of testosterone . Prostate Cancer Guide There are two methods of androgen deprivation therapy based on drugs.
Revised:  When our body detects a low level of testosterone, the hypothalamus starts to produce LHRH , a hormone which, once is received by the pituitary gland activates the synthesis of LH (Luteinizing hormone) . Prostate Cancer Guide There are two methods of androgen deprivation therapy based on drugs.
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Original:  Chemical castration There are two different medicines, LHRH agonists and antagonists, which both lower the amount of testosterone made by the testicles.
Revised:  . There are two different medicines, LHRH agonists and antagonists, which both lower the amount of testosterone made by the testicles.
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Original:  They work  inhibiting the formation of LH in the pituitary gland.
Revised:  They work by inhibiting the formation of LH in the pituitary gland.
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Original:  Although it is much more expensive, men tend to choose this option as they are usually reluctant to have their testicles cut .
Revised:  Chemical castration may be preferred to surgical castration as it keeps the testes intact .
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Original:  They are not of course, they are instead perfect examples of bureaucracy behaving in a its traditional manner of using nominally legitimate excuses for actions that remove all vestige of usability from whichever current target.
Revised:  They are not of course, they are instead perfect examples of bureaucracy behaving in its traditional manner of using nominally legitimate excuses for actions that remove all vestige of usability from whichever current target.
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Original:  They are not of course, they are instead perfect examples of bureaucracy behaving in a its traditional manner of using nominally legitimate excuses for actions that remove all vestige of usability from whichever current target.
Revised:  They are not of course, they are instead perfect examples of bureaucracy behaving in a its traditional manner , using nominally legitimate excuses for actions that remove all vestige of usability from whichever current target.
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Original:  This is of course done without any hint of the beneficial tweaks by which a normal (non bureaucratic) complainant might suggest angles of potential improvement to explanatory texts .
Revised:  This is of course done without any hint of the beneficial tweaks by which a normal (non bureaucratic) complainant might suggest angles of potential improvement to an explanatory text .
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Original: The important info by Me The analogy of the divided line () is presented by the Greek philosopher Plato in the Republic (509d–511e).
Revised: The The analogy of the divided line () is presented by the Greek philosopher Plato in the Republic (509d–511e).
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Original: The important info by Me The analogy of the divided line () is presented by the Greek philosopher Plato in the Republic (509d–511e).
Revised: The important info by Me analogy of the divided line () is presented by the Greek philosopher Plato in the Republic (509d–511e).
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Original:  The principal disciplines include, as major categories: geomatics engineering Geotechnical engineering;
Revised:  The principal disciplines include, as major categories: geomatics engineering geotechnical engineering;
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Original:  Geophysical Engineering Geophysical Engineering is the application of geophysics to the engineering design of facilities including roads, tunnels, and mines.
Revised:  Geophysical engineering Geophysical engineering is the application of geophysics to the engineering design of facilities including roads, tunnels, and mines.
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Original: Each discipline involves specialties, many of which are recognized through professional designations that governments and societies or associations confer based upon a person ’ s education, training, experience, and educational accomplishments.
Revised: Each discipline involves specialties, many of which are recognized through professional designations that governments and societies or associations confer based upon a person ' s education, training, experience, and educational accomplishments.
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Original:  and their preliminary recommendations for materials usage or appropriate foundation systems, the latter based on their knowledge of a structure ’ s size, shape, weight, etc., and the subsurface/structure interactions likely to occur.
Revised:  and their preliminary recommendations for materials usage or appropriate foundation systems, the latter based on their knowledge of a structure ' s size, shape, weight, etc., and the subsurface/structure interactions likely to occur.
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Original:  Civil engineers, structural engineers, and architects, feasibly among other members of the project team, apply the geotechnical findings and preliminary recommendations to take the structure ’ s design forward.
Revised:  Civil engineers, structural engineers, and architects, feasibly among other members of the project team, apply the geotechnical findings and preliminary recommendations to take the structure ' s design forward.
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Original:  Geoengineers study the mechanics of rock, soil, and fluids to improve the sustainable use of earth ’ s finite resources, where problems appear with competing interests, for example, groundwater and waste isolation, offshore oil drilling and risk of spills, natural gas production and induced seismicity.
Revised:  Geoengineers study the mechanics of rock, soil, and fluids to improve the sustainable use of earth ' s finite resources, where problems appear with competing interests, for example, groundwater and waste isolation, offshore oil drilling and risk of spills, natural gas production and induced seismicity.
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Original:  CoMET services applied to evaluate the actual composition of a site ’ s subsurface are part of a complete geotechnical engineering service.
Revised:  CoMET services applied to evaluate the actual composition of a site ' s subsurface are part of a complete geotechnical engineering service.
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Original:  CoMET services applied to evaluate constructor ’ s attainment of specified conditions take the form of quality-assurance (QA) or quality-control (QC) services.
Revised:  CoMET services applied to evaluate constructor ' s attainment of specified conditions take the form of quality-assurance (QA) or quality-control (QC) services.
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Original:  Those required by law are imposed via a jurisdiction ’ s building code.
Revised:  Those required by law are imposed via a jurisdiction ' s building code.
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