wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5– 7Winner 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6– 4Winner 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, USA Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Wright 6–3, 6–3
Revised:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5– 7Winner 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6– 4Win 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, USA Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Wright 6–3, 6–3
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Original:  Representing Illinois, she was the 1992 Singles Champion of the USTA National Women's Indoor Championships in Homewood for 35's .
Revised:  Representing Illinois, she was the 1992 Singles Champion of the USTA National Women's Indoor Championships in Homewood for 35s .
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Original:  In 1993, Yvonne Vermaak was the 25's Singles Champion, and again she was the 25's Singles Champion in 1994.
Revised:  In 1993, Yvonne Vermaak was the 25s Singles Champion, and again she was the 25's Singles Champion in 1994.
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Original:  In 1993, Yvonne Vermaak was the 25's Singles Champion, and again she was the 25's Singles Champion in 1994.
Revised:  In 1993, Yvonne Vermaak was the 25's Singles Champion, and again she was the 25s Singles Champion in 1994.
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Original:  In 1995, Vermaak moved on to Doubles , winning the 25's and 35's doubles with her partner Ann Kiyomura-Hayashi of California.
Revised:  In 1995, Vermaak moved to doubles , winning the 25's and 35's doubles with her partner Ann Kiyomura-Hayashi of California.
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Original:  In 1995, Vermaak moved on to Doubles , winning the 25's and 35's doubles with her partner Ann Kiyomura-Hayashi of California.
Revised:  In 1995, Vermaak moved on to Doubles , winning the 25s and 35s doubles with Ann Kiyomura-Hayashi of California.
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Original:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, USA Hard Stacy Margolin 5–7, 1–6Loss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, USA Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, USA Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
Revised:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, U.S. HardLoss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, USA Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, USA Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
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Original:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, USA Hard Stacy Margolin 5–7, 1–6Loss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, USA Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, USA Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
Revised:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, USA Hard Stacy Margolin 5–7, 1–6Loss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, U.S. Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, USA Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
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Original:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, USA Hard Stacy Margolin 5–7, 1–6Loss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, USA Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, USA Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
Revised:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, USA Hard Stacy Margolin 5–7, 1–6Loss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, USA Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, U.S. Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
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Original:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, USA Hard Stacy Margolin 5–7, 1–6Loss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, USA Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, USA Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
Revised:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, USA Hard Stacy Margolin 5–7, 1–6Loss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, USA Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, USA Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, U.S. Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
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Original:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, USA Hard Stacy Margolin 5–7, 1–6Loss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, USA Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, USA Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
Revised:  England Grass Michelle Tyler 6–4, 5–7, 6–1Loss 2. 17 September 1978 San Antonio, Texas, USA Hard Stacy Margolin 5–7, 1–6Loss 3. 11 January 1982 Fort Myers, Florida, USA Hard Lee Duk-hee 0–6, 3–6Win 4. 6 March 1983 Palm Springs, California, USA Hard Carling Bassett 6–3, 7–5Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Felicia Raschiatore 6–2, 0–6, 7–5Win 6. 16 September 1984 Salt Lake City, Utah, U.S. Hard Terry Holladay 6–1, 6–2 Doubles 7 (4–3)
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Original:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5–7Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6–4Win 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, USA Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Wright 6–3, 6–3
Revised:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5–7Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, U.S. Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6–4Win 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, USA Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Wright 6–3, 6–3
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Original:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5–7Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6–4Win 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, USA Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Wright 6–3, 6–3
Revised:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5–7Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6–4Win 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, U.S. Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, USA Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Wright 6–3, 6–3
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Original:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5–7Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6–4Win 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, USA Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Wright 6–3, 6–3
Revised:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5–7Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6–4Win 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, USA Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, USA Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Newberry 6–3, 6–3
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Original:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5–7Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, U.S. Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6–4Win 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, U.S. Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, USA Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Newberry 6–3, 6–3
Revised:  Italy Clay Kathy Horvath Billie Jean King Ilana Kloss 2–6, 6–4, 7–6Loss 4. 6 November 1982 Hong Kong Clay Jennifer Mundel Laura duPont Alycia Moulton 2–6, 6–4, 5–7Win 5. 19 September 1983 Salt Lake City, Utah, U.S. Hard Cláudia Monteiro Amanda Brown Brenda Remilton 6–1, 3–6, 6–4Win 6. 5 February 1984 Indianapolis, Indiana, U.S. Hard Cláudia Monteiro Beverly Mould Elizabeth Sayers 6–7, 6–4, 7–5Win 7. 6 April 1984 Miami, Florida, U.S. Clay Patricia Medrado Kate Latham Janet Newberry 6–3, 6–3
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Original: Wynand Malan (born May 25 , 1943) is a liberal Afrikaner South African politician.
Revised: Wynand Malan (born 25 , 1943) is a liberal Afrikaner South African politician.
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Original:  In the 1987 general election, he left the NPNew York Times "Liberals Regroup in South Africa" September 10 , 1990 and was elected as a representative of the new Independent Party which he co-founded with Denis Worrall.
Revised:  In the 1987 general election, he left the NPNew York Times "Liberals Regroup in South Africa" 10 , 1990 and was elected as a representative of the new Independent Party which he co-founded with Denis Worrall.
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Original:  It additionally , shows a dynamic force curve of power that provides the rower with detailed information about their stroke which they can use to improve technique and rowing efficiency in terms of energy output.
Revised:  It additionally shows a dynamic force curve of power that provides the rower with detailed information about their stroke which they can use to improve technique and rowing efficiency in terms of energy output.
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Original: Modern indoor rowers are often known as ergometers (colloquially erg or ergo) , which is technically incorrect, as an ergometer is a device which measures the amount of work performed .
Revised: Modern indoor rowers are often known as ergometers (colloquially erg or ergo) because they measure the amount of work performed .
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Original: Modern indoor rowers are often known as ergometers (colloquially erg or ergo) because they measure the amount of work performed by the rower.
Revised: Modern indoor rowers are often known as ergometers (colloquially erg or ergo) because they measure work, which can be measured in ergs, performed by the rower.
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Original:  The indoor rowers which utilise this flywheel resistance can be categorised into two motion types.
Revised:  Indoor rowers that utilise flywheel resistance can be categorised into two motion types.
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Original:  Braked flywheel resistance models comprise magnetic, air, and water resistance URL Water resistance models consist of a paddle revolving in an enclosed tank of water.
Revised:  Braked flywheel resistance models comprise magnetic, air, and water resistance rowers. Water resistance models consist of a paddle revolving in an enclosed tank of water.
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Original:  Exercise An extremely efficient method of exercise , rowing uses 86\% of muscles when done with correct form.
Revised:  Exercise Rowing is an efficient method of exercise , rowing uses 86\% of muscles when done with correct form.
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Original:  Exercise An extremely efficient method of exercise , rowing uses 86\% of muscles when done with correct form.
Revised:  Exercise An extremely efficient method of exercise which uses 86\% of muscles when done with correct form.
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Original:  Ergometer testing Although ergometer tests are used by rowing coaches to evaluate rowers and are part of athlete selection for many senior and junior national rowing teams,  " the data suggest that physiological and performance tests performed on a rowing ergometer are not good indicators of on water performance".
Revised:  Ergometer testing Although ergometer tests are used by rowing coaches to evaluate rowers and are part of athlete selection for many senior and junior national rowing teams, data suggests that: " the data suggest that physiological and performance tests performed on a rowing ergometer are not good indicators of on water performance".
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Original:  Ergometer testing Although ergometer tests are used by rowing coaches to evaluate rowers and are part of athlete selection for many senior and junior national rowing teams,  " the data suggest that physiological and performance tests performed on a rowing ergometer are not good indicators of on water performance".
Revised:  Ergometer testing Although ergometer tests are used by rowing coaches to evaluate rowers and are part of athlete selection for many senior and junior national rowing teams, " physiological and performance tests performed on a rowing ergometer are not good indicators of on water performance".
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Original: Ed McNeely, The Sport Journal, Jan. 2, 2012 Not all indoor-rowing challenges are competitive . Some are about time, not distance , such as the EnduRow challenge.
Revised: Ed McNeely, The Sport Journal, Jan. 2, 2012 Not all indoor-rowing challenges are competitive , some are about time, not distance , such as the EnduRow challenge.
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Original:   Indoor rowing has become established as a sport in its own right , drawing a competitive environment from across the world.
Revised:  Indoor rowing has become established as a sport , drawing a competitive environment from across the world.
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Original: John R. Hale, "Lords of the Sea: The Epic Story of the Athenian Navy and the Birth of Democracy"   Exercise Rowing is an efficient method of exercise which uses 86\% of muscles when done with correct form.
Revised: John R. Hale, "Lords of the Sea: The Epic Story of the Athenian Navy and the Birth of Democracy" Use Exercise Rowing is an efficient method of exercise which uses 86\% of muscles when done with correct form.
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Original:  The formula used to calculate watts is . Ergometer testing Although ergometer tests are used by rowing coaches to evaluate rowers and are part of athlete selection for many senior and junior national rowing teams, data suggests that: "physiological and performance tests performed on a rowing ergometer are not good indicators of on water performance".
Revised:  The formula used to calculate watts is . Testing Although ergometer tests are used by rowing coaches to evaluate rowers and are part of athlete selection for many senior and junior national rowing teams, data suggests that: "physiological and performance tests performed on a rowing ergometer are not good indicators of on water performance".
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Original: Ed McNeely, The Sport Journal, Jan. 2, 2012 Rowing technique Rowing on an ergometer requires four basic phases to complete one stroke;
Revised: Ed McNeely, The Sport Journal, Jan. 2, 2012 Technique Rowing on an ergometer requires four basic phases to complete one stroke;
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Original:  Competitions The first indoor rowing competition was held in Cambridge, MA in February 1982 with participation of 96 on-water rowers who called themselves the "Charles River Association of Sculling Has-Beens".
Revised:  Sport The first indoor rowing competition was held in Cambridge, MA in February 1982 with participation of 96 on-water rowers who called themselves the "Charles River Association of Sculling Has-Beens".
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Original:  Online Challenges sponsored by Concept2 include the annual ultra-rowing challenge, the Virtual Team Challenge.
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Original:  Not all indoor-rowing challenges are competitive , some are about time, not distance.
Revised:  However, not all indoor-rowing challenges are competitive , some are about time, not distance.
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Original:  Not all indoor-rowing challenges are competitive , some are about time, not distance.
Revised:  Not all indoor-rowing challenges are competitive and some are about time, not distance.
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Original:  When the legs are fully extended, the rower begins to pull the handle toward the chest with their arms, completing the stroke with the handle half way up the body and the forearms parallel to the URL
Revised:  When the legs are fully extended, the rower begins to pull the handle toward the chest with their arms, completing the stroke with the handle half way up the body and the forearms parallel to the ground.
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Original:  However, not all indoor-rowing challenges are competitive and some are about time not distance, e.g. EnduRow Challenge .
Revised:  However, not all indoor-rowing challenges are competitive and some are about time , not distance .
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Original: Sport The first indoor rowing competition was held in Cambridge, MA in February 1982 with participation of 96 on-water rowers who called themselves the "Charles River Association of Sculling Has-Beens" .Concept 2 promotional booklet, year 2000 Thus the acronym, "CRASH-B".
Revised: Sport The first indoor rowing competition was held in Cambridge, Massachusetts in February 1982 with participation of 96 on-water rowers who called themselves the "Charles River Association of Sculling Has-Beens" .Concept 2 promotional booklet, year 2000 Thus the acronym, "CRASH-B".
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Original: Sport The first indoor rowing competition was held in Cambridge, MA in February 1982 with participation of 96 on-water rowers who called themselves the "Charles River Association of Sculling Has-Beens" .Concept 2 promotional booklet, year 2000 Thus the acronym, "CRASH-B".
Revised: Sport The first indoor rowing competition was held in Cambridge, MA in February 1982 with participation of 96 on-water rowers who called themselves the "Charles River Association of Sculling Has-Beens" , hence the acronym, "CRASH-B".
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Original:  The core events for indoor rowing competitions that are currently competed in at the World Rowing Indoor Championships are the individual 500-m, individual 2000-m , individual 1 hour and 3 minute teams event.
Revised:  The core events for indoor rowing competitions that are currently competed in at the World Rowing Indoor Championships are the individual 500m, individual 2000m , individual 1 hour and 3 minute teams event.
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Original:  Events at other indoor rowing competitions include the mile (e.g., Evesham), the 2500 meter (e. g., Basingstoke—also the original distance of the CRASH-B Sprints).
Revised:  Events at other indoor rowing competitions include the mile and the 2500 meter (e. g., Basingstoke—also the original distance of the CRASH-B Sprints).
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Original:  Events at other indoor rowing competitions include the mile (e.g., Evesham), the 2500 meter (e. g., Basingstoke—also the original distance of the CRASH-B Sprints).
Revised:  Events at other indoor rowing competitions include the mile (e.g., Evesham), the 2500 meter .
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Original:  At each stage of the stroke the back should remain in a neutral, flat position, pivoting at the hips to avoid to avoid injury.
Revised:  At each stage of the stroke the back should remain in a neutral, flat position, pivoting at the hips to avoid injury.
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Original:  Like all Progressive MPs with the sole exception of Helen Suzman, Steytler lost his seat in the South African parliament in the 1961 general election.
Revised:  Like all Progressive MPs with the sole exception of Helen Suzman, he lost his seat in the South African parliament in the 1961 general election.
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Original:  However when boundary changes made Queenstown marginal, Steytler won the seat by a majoroity of 13 in the South African general election, 1958.
Revised:  However when boundary changes made Queenstown marginal, Steytler won the seat by a majority of 13 in the South African general election, 1958.
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Original: Jan van Aswegen Steytler (born 1910, date of death unknown) was a liberal South African politician and the first leader of the Progressive Party (PP).
Revised: Johannes "Jan" van Aswegen Steytler (born 1910, date of death unknown) was a liberal South African politician and the first leader of the Progressive Party (PP).
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Original: Johannes "Jan" van Aswegen Steytler ( born October 26, 1910 , date of death unknown ) was a liberal South African politician and the first leader of the Progressive Party (PP).
Revised: Johannes "Jan" van Aswegen Steytler ( October 26, 1910 , date of death unknown ) was a liberal South African politician and the first leader of the Progressive Party (PP).
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Original:  It  becoming rare in people with chronic kidney disease managed on long-term hemodialysis, with estimated prevalence between 0.8 to 3\%.
Revised:  It is becoming rare in people with chronic kidney disease managed on long-term hemodialysis, with estimated prevalence between 0.8 to 3\%.
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Original:  He also worked for India Abroad, and was its correspondent in San Francisco, USA .Print Article - Journalist Batuk Vora dead
Revised:  He also worked for India Abroad, and was its correspondent in San Francisco, United States .Print Article - Journalist Batuk Vora dead
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Original:  Print Article - Journalist Batuk Vora dead In the 1978 Gujarat state assembly elections he contested and won the Palitana seat in Bhavnagar district as a CPI candidate.
Revised:  In the 1978 Gujarat state assembly elections he contested and won the Palitana seat in Bhavnagar district as a CPI candidate.
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