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Original: TV Guide did not receive any requests for comment by press time about the scrapped live broadcast.
Revised: TV Guide did not receive any comment by press time about the scrapped live broadcast.
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Original: Bali bomber still at large A body recovered by Indonesian police on August 8th is not that of Noordin Mohammed Top .
Revised: Bali bomber still at large A body recovered by Indonesian police on August 8th is not that of .
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Original:  The Indonesian authorities had been optimistic that Top, the mastermind behind the 2002 Bali bombings , had been killed on Saturday in a gun battle that concluded a 17 hour siege in the Temanggung district of Central Java . DNA tests suggests that the body is that of a man identified only as Ibrahim, a florist who was the inside man in the attacks on luxury hotels in Jakarta this July
Revised:  The Indonesian authorities had been optimistic that Top, the mastermind behind the , had been killed on Saturday in a gun battle that concluded a 17 hour siege in the Temanggung district of Central Java . DNA tests suggests that the body is that of a man identified only as Ibrahim, a florist who was the inside man in the attacks on luxury hotels in Jakarta this July
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Original:  The Indonesian authorities had been optimistic that Top, the mastermind behind the 2002 Bali bombings , had been killed on Saturday in a gun battle that concluded a 17 hour siege in the Temanggung district of Central Java . DNA tests suggests that the body is that of a man identified only as Ibrahim, a florist who was the inside man in the attacks on luxury hotels in Jakarta this July
Revised:  The Indonesian authorities had been optimistic that Top, the mastermind behind the 2002 Bali bombings , had been killed on Saturday in a gun battle that concluded a 17 hour siege in the district of Central Java . DNA tests suggests that the body is that of a man identified only as Ibrahim, a florist who was the inside man in the attacks on luxury hotels in Jakarta this July
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Original:  The Indonesian authorities had been optimistic that Top, the mastermind behind the 2002 Bali bombings , had been killed on Saturday in a gun battle that concluded a 17 hour siege in the Temanggung district of Central Java . DNA tests suggests that the body is that of a man identified only as Ibrahim, a florist who was the inside man in the attacks on luxury hotels in Jakarta this July
Revised:  The Indonesian authorities had been optimistic that Top, the mastermind behind the 2002 Bali bombings , had been killed on Saturday in a gun battle that concluded a 17 hour siege in the Temanggung district of Central . DNA tests suggests that the body is that of a man identified only as Ibrahim, a florist who was the inside man in the attacks on luxury hotels in Jakarta this July
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Original:  The Indonesian authorities had been optimistic that Top, the mastermind behind the 2002 Bali bombings , had been killed on Saturday in a gun battle that concluded a 17 hour siege in the Temanggung district of Central Java . DNA tests suggests that the body is that of a man identified only as Ibrahim, a florist who was the inside man in the attacks on luxury hotels in Jakarta this July
Revised:  The Indonesian authorities had been optimistic that Top, the mastermind behind the 2002 Bali bombings , had been killed on Saturday in a gun battle that concluded a 17 hour siege in the Temanggung district of Central Java . suggests that the body is that of a man identified only as Ibrahim, a florist who was the inside man in the attacks on luxury hotels in Jakarta this July
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Original:  Ashley Blake,  who presented Midlands Today, attacked seventeen year old Greg Jones with a wooden pole outside a bar in Birmingham in January.
Revised:  Ashley Blake, who presented Midlands Today, attacked Greg Jones, 17, with a wooden pole outside a bar in Birmingham in January.
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Original:  He was also convicted of perverting the cause of justice.
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Original:  The presenter denied the attack and claimed he used the pole to protect himself from bottles being thrown at him by up to 30 people.
Revised:  The presenter denied the attack and claimed he used the pole to protect himself from bottles being thrown at him by up to thirty people.
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Original:  Blake was arrested at the scene.
Revised:  Blake was also convicted of attempting to pervert the course of justice. The judge told Blake it was "almost inevitable" he was going to be sent to jail.
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Original:  A BBC spokesman released a statement saying "Ashley Blake was found guilty last week of two serious charges.
Revised:  A BBC spokesman released a statement that said, "Ashley Blake was found guilty last week of two serious charges.
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Original:  After the conviction on August 3rd Blake spoke to reporters saying " (I am) just gutted, absolutely gutted... it's all over, isn't it?
Revised:  After the conviction , Blake spoke to reporters saying " (I am) just gutted, absolutely gutted... it's all over, isn't it?
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Original:  After the conviction on August 3rd Blake spoke to reporters saying " (I am) just gutted, absolutely gutted... it's all over, isn't it?
Revised:  After the conviction on August 3rd Blake spoke to reporters , saying, " (I am) just gutted, absolutely gutted... it's all over, isn't it?
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Original:  After the conviction on August 3rd Blake spoke to reporters saying " (I am) just gutted, absolutely gutted... it's all over, isn't it?
Revised:  After the conviction on August 3rd Blake spoke to reporters saying " I am just gutted, absolutely gutted... it's all over, isn't it?
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Original: The trial took place at Birmingham Crown Court  on August 3.
Revised: The trial took place at Birmingham Crown Court and concluded on August 3.
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Original: The BBC logo A BBC newsreader has lost his job after he was found guilty of wounding a teenager.
Revised: The BBC logo A BBC newsreader has lost his job after he was found guilty of unlawful wounding of a teenager.
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Original:  Jones recieved injuries to his lip and chin.
Revised:  Jones received injuries to his lip and chin.
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Original:  My job - everything."
Revised:  My job — everything."
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Original:  He will be sentenced on September 2nd
Revised:  Blake is scheduled to be sentenced on September 2nd
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Original:  He will be sentenced on September 2nd
Revised:  He will be sentenced on September 2
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Original:  Guitarist Joe Perry said " Words can't express the sadness I feel for having to cancel this tour  " While guitarist Brad Whitford wished Tyler a “speedy recovery”.
Revised:  Guitarist Joe Perry said " words can't express the sadness I feel for having to cancel this tour " While guitarist Brad Whitford wished Tyler a “speedy recovery”.
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Original:  Guitarist Joe Perry said " Words can't express the sadness I feel for having to cancel this tour  " While guitarist Brad Whitford wished Tyler a “speedy recovery”.
Revised:  Guitarist Joe Perry said " Words can't express the sadness I feel for having to cancel this tour , " While guitarist Brad Whitford wished Tyler a “speedy recovery”.
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Original:  Guitarist Joe Perry said " Words can't express the sadness I feel for having to cancel this tour  " While guitarist Brad Whitford wished Tyler a “speedy recovery”.
Revised:  Guitarist Joe Perry said " Words can't express the sadness I feel for having to cancel this tour " while guitarist Brad Whitford wished Tyler a “speedy recovery”.
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Original:  The injured Tyler released a statement  saying “I'm plain grateful that I didn't break my neck” and thanked the police and medical staff for there help
Revised:  The injured Tyler released a statement , saying “I'm plain grateful that I didn't break my neck” and thanked the police and medical staff for there help
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Original: Aerosmith have cancelled the remaining concerts on their tour.
Revised: Aerosmith have cancelled their remaining concerts on their tour.
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Original:  The rock band were due to tour the United States and Canada until the 16th of September.
Revised:  The rock band was due to tour the United States and Canada until the 16th of September.
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Original:  They have cancelled the tour after lead singer Steven Tyler was injured when he fell off stage while performing on August 5th.
Revised:  They have cancelled the tour after lead singer Steven Tyler was injured after he fell off stage while performing on August 5th.
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Original:  He was airlifted to hospital after the fall  and later travelled to Boston to see his own doctor.
Revised:  He was airlifted to hospital after the fall , and later travelled to Boston to see his own doctor.
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Original: According to official records, Hong Kong's economy has left a year-long recession, recording a growth of 3.3\% in June's second quarter .
Revised: According to official records, Hong Kong's economy has left a year-long recession, recording a growth of 3.3\% in the second quarter ended in June .
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Original:  Previously, estimates suggested the economy would contract by 5.5\% to 6.5\%.
Revised:  Previous estimates suggested the economy would contract by 5.5\% to 6.5\%.
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Original:  The US National Hurricane Center upgraded the storm to a Category One hurricane at 23.00 on Thursday, after Guillermo sustained winds of 75 miles per hour.
Revised:  The US National Hurricane Center upgraded the storm to a Category 1 hurricane at 23.00 on Thursday, after Guillermo sustained winds of 75 miles per hour.
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Original:  He has terminal prostate cancer and it is thought that he is due to be released shortly on compassionate grounds, having served eight years of his minimum term of 27 years in Greenock prison   
Revised:  He has terminal prostate cancer and it is thought that he is due to be released shortly on compassionate grounds, having served eight years of his minimum term of 27 years in Greenock prison . 
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Original:  The facts are the facts, Mr. Megrahi is guilty.  
Revised:  The facts are the facts, Mr. Megrahi is guilty. " 
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Original:  The decision to drop his second appeal comes as a surprise, with some victims' relatives expecting the procedings to continue even after his death.
Revised:  The decision to drop his second appeal comes as a surprise, with some victims' relatives expecting the procEedings to continue even after his death.
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Original: The Lockerbie memorial Abdelbaset Ali al-Megrahi was revealed today to have requested his second appeal to be dropped. al-Megrahi was convicted of planting a bomb on Pan Am Flight 103, which detonated as the aircraft flew over Lockerbie, Scotland in 1988 killing all 259 people on board and eleven more on the ground.
Revised: The Lockerbie memorial Abdelbaset Ali al-Megrahi was revealed today to have requested his second appeal to be dropped. Al-Megrahi was convicted of planting a bomb on Pan Am Flight 103, which detonated as the aircraft flew over Lockerbie, Scotland in 1988 killing all 259 people on board and eleven more on the ground.
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Original:  Nowhere." Last year, on the twentieth aniversary of the disaster the head of the US group Victims of Pan Am Flight 103, Kara Weipz, told Wikinews that "There is no difference between the truth as we see it and the official version of events.
Revised:  Nowhere." Last year, on the twentieth anniversary of the disaster the head of the US group Victims of Pan Am Flight 103, Kara Weipz, told Wikinews that "There is no difference between the truth as we see it and the official version of events.
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Original:  Observation flights will last until July 1.
Revised:  These flights are expected to last until July 1.
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Original:  Seven Belarusian and two Russian inspectors will monitor foreign planes.
Revised:  Seven Belarusian and two Russian inspectors monitoring foreign planes.
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Original:  According to the spokesman of Belarusian Ministry of Defense, Russia and Belarusia have finished their anologous flight over the USA on June 25
Revised:  According to the spokesman of Belarusian Ministry of Defense, Russia and Belarusia have finished their analogous flight over the USA on June 25
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Original: frame|Belarus in green, Russia in blue In accordance with the Treaty on Open Skies, Norway and Denmark started conducting observation flights over Belarus and Russia yesterday.
Revised:  In accordance with the Treaty on Open Skies, Norway and Denmark started conducting observation flights over Belarus and Russia yesterday.
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Original: Students  which Lukashenko met were recievers of Belarusian presidential stipendies.
Revised: Students , which Lukashenko met were recievers of Belarusian presidential stipendies.
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Original: Students  which Lukashenko met were recievers of Belarusian presidential stipendies.
Revised: Students which Lukashenko met , were receivers of Belarusian presidential stipendies.
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Original:  He said  that the idea of domestic funds was created "in uneasy times" to keep talented students in Belarus.
Revised:  He said , that the idea of domestic funds was created "in uneasy times" to keep talented students in Belarus.
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Original: The Government of the United Kingdom has assumed direct rule over the Turks and Caicos Islands in the Caribbean . Self governing since 1976, the islands government was suspended and power transfered to the British appointed Governor when a commission of inquiry discovered what it alleges to be corruption and "serious dishonesty" at the highest levels.
Revised: The Government of the United Kingdom has assumed direct rule over the Turks and Caicos Islands in the Caribbean , after an enquiry discovered what it alleges to be corruption and "serious dishonesty" at the highest levels.
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Original:   The UK has taken the unusual step because it alleges that former Premier Michael Misick and members of his cabinet have enriched themselves through the selling of crown land and other corrupt practices, and that the limits to suffrage in the islands makes it impossible to form a jury immune to the influence of the accused.
Revised:  The British Government has taken the unusual step because it alleges that former Premier Michael Misick and members of his cabinet have enriched themselves through the selling of crown land and other corrupt practices, and that the limits to suffrage in the islands makes it impossible to form a jury immune to the influence of the accused.
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Original:   The UK has taken the unusual step because it alleges that former Premier Michael Misick and members of his cabinet have enriched themselves through the selling of crown land and other corrupt practices, and that the limits to suffrage in the islands makes it impossible to form a jury immune to the influence of the accused.
Revised:  The UK has taken the unusual step because it alleges that former Premier Michael Misick and members of his cabinet have enriched themselves through the selling of crown land and other corrupt practices, and that the limits to suffrage in the islands make it impossible to form a jury immune to the influence of the accused.
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Original:  "This is a serious constitutional step which the UK government has not taken lightly, but these measures are essential in order to restore good governance and sound financial management," said Chris Bryant the  Parliamentary Under-Secretary of State for Foreign Affairs.
Revised:  "This is a serious constitutional step which the UK government has not taken lightly, but these measures are essential in order to restore good governance and sound financial management," said Chris Bryant the British Parliamentary Under-Secretary of State for Foreign Affairs.
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Original:  However the reaction on the islands have been hostile,
Revised:  However the reaction by the local government have been hostile,
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Original:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
Revised:  with the action being described as a "coup" by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
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Original:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
Revised:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams . He told the BBC, "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
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Original:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
Revised:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us . " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
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Original:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
Revised:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " The Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
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Original:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
Revised:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British overseas territories since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
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Original:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have developed its off shore banking and tourism industries
Revised:  with the action being described as a coup by deposed Premier Galmo Williams telling the BBC "A coup is anything that has been done without the will of the people and being a colony anything the British government wants to do to us they can do to us , " Currently British overseas territories the Turks and Caicos Islands have been British possessions since 1799, and since gaining self-governance have significantly developed offshore banking and tourism industries
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Original:  Self-governing since 1976, power was transferred to the UK-appointed Governor and the island' s administration suspended for up to two years.
Revised:  Self-governing since 1976, power was transferred to the UK-appointed Governor and the islands' administration suspended for up to two years.
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Original:  Self-governing since 1976, power was transferred to the UK-appointed Governor and the islands' administration suspended for up to two years  .
Revised:  The islands premier and islands' administration suspended for up to two years .
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Original:  Self-governing since 1976, power was transferred to the UK-appointed Governor and the islands' administration suspended for up to two years  .
Revised:  Self-governing since 1976, power was transferred to the UK-appointed Governor and the islands' administration suspended for up to two years and their powers transferred to the UK-appointed Governor .
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Original:  The islands premier and islands' administration suspended for up to two years and their powers transferred to the UK-appointed Governor.
Revised:  The islands ' administration and Premier have been suspended for up to two years and their powers transferred to the UK-appointed Governor.
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Original:  The Turks and Caicos Islands have been British overseas territories since 1799, and since gaining self-governance in 1976 have significantly developed offshore banking and tourism industries
Revised:  The Turks and Caicos Islands have been British overseas territories since 1799, and since achieving self-governance in 1976 have significantly developed offshore banking and tourism industries
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