wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   "It is our responsibility to all of California's children, especially our disadvantaged and minority students, to equip them with the most basic skills they will need in college, in work and in life,” said Schwarzenegger.
Revised:  " "It is our responsibility to all of California's children, especially our disadvantaged and minority students, to equip them with the most basic skills they will need in college, in work and in life,” said Schwarzenegger.
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Original:  “ Postponing the exam graduation requirement will hurt our children in the long run by depriving us of the best tool we have to measure how well schools are doing their job.
Revised:  " Postponing the exam graduation requirement will hurt our children in the long run by depriving us of the best tool we have to measure how well schools are doing their job.
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Original:  ” He said he ’ s budgeted more money to help students pass the test: “ My 2006-07 budget will add $7.7 million for three additional administration of the exam and we will also provide $65 million this year to give students at risk of failing the exam the support they need to pass it."
Revised:  " He said he ’ s budgeted more money to help students pass the test: “ My 2006-07 budget will add $7.7 million for three additional administration of the exam and we will also provide $65 million this year to give students at risk of failing the exam the support they need to pass it."
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Original:  ” He said he ’ s budgeted more money to help students pass the test: “ My 2006-07 budget will add $7.7 million for three additional administration of the exam and we will also provide $65 million this year to give students at risk of failing the exam the support they need to pass it."
Revised:  ” He said he ' s budgeted more money to help students pass the test: “ My 2006-07 budget will add $7.7 million for three additional administration of the exam and we will also provide $65 million this year to give students at risk of failing the exam the support they need to pass it."
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Original:  ” He said he ’ s budgeted more money to help students pass the test: “ My 2006-07 budget will add $7.7 million for three additional administration of the exam and we will also provide $65 million this year to give students at risk of failing the exam the support they need to pass it."
Revised:  ” He said he ’ s budgeted more money to help students pass the test: " My 2006-07 budget will add $7.7 million for three additional administration of the exam and we will also provide $65 million this year to give students at risk of failing the exam the support they need to pass it."
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Original:  The high court has 90 days to decide whether to hear O ’Connell’ s appeal once it ’ s filed, but could act more quickly if it chooses
Revised:  The high court has 90 days to decide whether to hear O 'Connell' s appeal once it ’ s filed, but could act more quickly if it chooses
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Original:  The high court has 90 days to decide whether to hear O ’Connell’ s appeal once it ’ s filed, but could act more quickly if it chooses
Revised:  The high court has 90 days to decide whether to hear O ’Connell’ s appeal once it ' s filed, but could act more quickly if it chooses
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Original: Former U.S. Senator Rick Santorum of Pennsylvania ended his campaign for the U.S. presidential nomination on Tuesday, two weeks ahead of his home-state 's presidential primary.
Revised: Former U.S. Senator Rick Santorum of Pennsylvania ended his campaign for the U.S. presidential nomination on Tuesday, two weeks ahead of his home state 's presidential primary.
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Original:  According to , the withdrawal "avoid s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% a potentially humiliating loss to Mitt Romney in the Pennsylvaniaprimary.
Revised:  s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% a potentially humiliating loss to Mitt Romney in the Pennsylvaniaprimary.
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Original:  According to , the withdrawal "avoid s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% a potentially humiliating loss to Mitt Romney in the Pennsylvaniaprimary.
Revised:  According to , the withdrawal "avoid %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% a potentially humiliating loss to Mitt Romney in the Pennsylvaniaprimary.
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Original:  This all but assures that former Massachusetts Mitt Romney will win the party's presidential nomination, though former Newt Gingrich and Representative Ron Paul of Texas remain in the race.
Revised:  In addition to former Massachusetts Mitt Romney will win the party's presidential nomination, though former Newt Gingrich and Representative Ron Paul of Texas remain in the race.
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Original:  This all but assures that former Massachusetts Mitt Romney will win the party's presidential nomination, though former Newt Gingrich and Representative Ron Paul of Texas remain in the race.
Revised:  This all but assures that former Massachusetts Mitt Romney , former Newt Gingrich and Representative Ron Paul of Texas remain in the race.
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Original: , former third grade teacher at the , was officially added to the FBI's top ten most wanted list . (FBI) began investigating Toth in 2008 when a school camera allegedly used by Toth contained child pornography.
Revised: , former third grade teacher at the , was officially added to the FBI's . (FBI) began investigating Toth in 2008 when a school camera allegedly used by Toth contained child pornography.
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Original:  The FBI is currently offering a reward for up to $100,000 leading to Toth's arrest  
Revised:  The FBI is currently offering a reward for up to $100,000 leading to Toth's arrest . 
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Original: Ex-Washington, D.C. teacher , who worked at the National Cathedral's Beauvoir school, was officially added to the  FBI's yesterday  .
Revised: Ex-Washington, D.C. teacher , who worked at the National Cathedral's Beauvoir school, was officially added to the top of the FBI's yesterday .
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Original:  We have nice software but nobody knows ;)  Further Information on OpenSync can be found on the OpenSync Website: www.opensync.org ------ This Interview was done by Arne Babenhauserheide in April 2006 via e-mail and KOffice on behalf of himself, the OpenSource Community, SpreadKDE.org and the Dot (dot.kde.org).
Revised:  We have nice software but nobody knows ;) Further Information on OpenSync can be found on the OpenSync Website: www.opensync.org This Interview was done by Arne Babenhauserheide in April 2006 via e-mail and KOffice on behalf of himself, the OpenSource Community, SpreadKDE.org and the Dot (dot.kde.org).
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Original:  A pdf-version with pictures can be found at draketo.de (odt-version (koffice) ) And if you want to make me happy, just take a look at my website and read some of my shortstories, poems and strange ideas or listen to some of my songs. :) Or donate me 10 M€, so I will never have to work again and can commit all my time to my hobbies :) <p> - Arne Babenhauserheide UR
Revised:  A pdf-version with pictures can be found at draketo.de (odt-version (koffice) ) And if you want to make me happy, just take a look at my website and read some of my shortstories, poems and strange ideas or listen to some of my songs. :) Or donate me 10 M€, so I will never have to work again and can commit all my time to my hobbies :) - Arne Babenhauserheide UR
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Original:  A pdf-version with pictures can be found at draketo.de (odt-version (koffice) ) And if you want to make me happy, just take a look at my website and read some of my shortstories, poems and strange ideas or listen to some of my songs. :) Or donate me 10 M€, so I will never have to work again and can commit all my time to my hobbies :) <p> - Arne Babenhauserheide UR
Revised:  A pdf-version with pictures can be found at draketo.de (odt-version (koffice) ) And if you want to make me happy, just take a look at my website and read some of my shortstories, poems and strange ideas or listen to some of my songs. :) Or donate me 10 M€, so I will never have to work again and can commit all my time to my hobbies :) <p> - Arne Babenhauserheide (draketo.de
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Original: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers > Hi Cornelius, Armin and Tobias , As you are now getting close to version 1.0 of OpenSync, which is expected to become the new synchronisation framework for KDE and other free desktops, we are quite interested in the merits it can provide for KDE users and for developers, as well as for the Open Source Community as a whole.
Revised: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers Hi Cornelius, Armin and Tobias , As you are now getting close to version 1.0 of OpenSync, which is expected to become the new synchronisation framework for KDE and other free desktops, we are quite interested in the merits it can provide for KDE users and for developers, as well as for the Open Source Community as a whole.
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Original: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers > Hi Cornelius, Armin and Tobias , As you are now getting close to version 1.0 of OpenSync, which is expected to become the new synchronisation framework for KDE and other free desktops, we are quite interested in the merits it can provide for KDE users and for developers, as well as for the Open Source Community as a whole.
Revised: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers > Hi Cornelius, Armin and Tobias . As you are now getting close to version 1.0 of OpenSync, which is expected to become the new synchronisation framework for KDE and other free desktops, we are quite interested in the merits it can provide for KDE users and for developers, as well as for the Open Source Community as a whole.
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Original:  So there's one key-question before I move deeper into the details of OpenSync: > What does OpenSync accomplish, that noone did before?
Revised:  So there's one key-question before I move deeper into the details of OpenSync: What does OpenSync accomplish, that noone did before?
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Original:   > How do the end-users profit from using synching solutions which interface with OpenSync as framework?
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Original:   > How do the end-users profit from using synching solutions which interface with OpenSync as framework?
Revised:  How do the end-users profit from using synching solutions which interface with OpenSync as framework?
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Original:  > How does OpenSync help developers with coding?
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Original:  > Why should producers of portable devices get involved with your team?
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Original:  > Do you also plan to support applications of OpenSync in proprietary systems like OSX and Windows?
Revised:  Do you also plan to support applications of OpenSync in proprietary systems like OSX and Windows?
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Original:  > What does your synchronisation framework do for KDE and for KitchenSync in particular?
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Original:  > What was your personal reason for getting involved with OpenSync? > Can you tell us a bit about your further plans and ideas?
Revised:  What was your personal reason for getting involved with OpenSync? > Can you tell us a bit about your further plans and ideas?
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Original:  > What was your personal reason for getting involved with OpenSync? > Can you tell us a bit about your further plans and ideas?
Revised:  > What was your personal reason for getting involved with OpenSync? Can you tell us a bit about your further plans and ideas?
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Original:  > What was the most dire problem you had to face when creating OpenSync and how did you face it?
Revised:  What was the most dire problem you had to face when creating OpenSync and how did you face it?
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Original:  > What was the greatest moment for you?
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Original:  > As we now know the worst problem you faced and your greatest moment, the only one missing is: What was your weirdest experience while working on OpenSync? > Now I'd like to move on to some more specific questions about current and planned abilities of OpenSync.
Revised:  As we now know the worst problem you faced and your greatest moment, the only one missing is: What was your weirdest experience while working on OpenSync? > Now I'd like to move on to some more specific questions about current and planned abilities of OpenSync.
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Original:  > As we now know the worst problem you faced and your greatest moment, the only one missing is: What was your weirdest experience while working on OpenSync? > Now I'd like to move on to some more specific questions about current and planned abilities of OpenSync.
Revised:  > As we now know the worst problem you faced and your greatest moment, the only one missing is: What was your weirdest experience while working on OpenSync? Now I'd like to move on to some more specific questions about current and planned abilities of OpenSync.
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Original:  > Which other devices do you already support?
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Original:  > Which programs already implement OpenSync and where can we check back to find new additions?
Revised:  Which programs already implement OpenSync and where can we check back to find new additions?
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Original:  News can generally be found on the OpenSync web site ( www.opensync.org ) . > So far for questions for users.
Revised:  News can generally be found on the OpenSync web site www.opensync.org ) . > So far for questions for users.
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Original:  News can generally be found on the OpenSync web site ( www.opensync.org ) . > So far for questions for users.
Revised:  News can generally be found on the OpenSync web site ( www.opensync.org . > So far for questions for users.
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Original:  News can generally be found on the OpenSync web site ( www.opensync.org ) . > So far for questions for users.
Revised:  News can generally be found on the OpenSync web site ( www.opensync.org ) . So far for questions for users.
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Original:  > And for the second, deeper dive: Can you give us a quick outline of those inner workings of OpenSync, from the developers view, which make OpenSync especially viable for application in several different desktop environments?
Revised:  And for the second, deeper dive: Can you give us a quick outline of those inner workings of OpenSync, from the developers view, which make OpenSync especially viable for application in several different desktop environments?
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Original:  > To add some more spice for those of our readers, whose interest you just managed to spawn (or to skyrocket), please tell us where they can get more information on the OpenSync Framework, how they can best meet and help you and how they can help improving sync-support for KDE by helping OpenSync. [And even though] I already said it, it can't be repeated too often: OpenSync will be the one unified syncing solution for the free desktop.
Revised:  To add some more spice for those of our readers, whose interest you just managed to spawn (or to skyrocket), please tell us where they can get more information on the OpenSync Framework, how they can best meet and help you and how they can help improving sync-support for KDE by helping OpenSync. [And even though] I already said it, it can't be repeated too often: OpenSync will be the one unified syncing solution for the free desktop.
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Original:  > Many thanks for your time!
Revised:  Many thanks for your time!
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Original:  We have nice software but nobody knows ;) <p><i> Further Information on OpenSync can be found on the OpenSync Website: www.opensync.org This Interview was done by Arne Babenhauserheide in April 2006 via e-mail and KOffice on behalf of himself, the OpenSource Community, SpreadKDE.org and the Dot (dot.kde.org).
Revised:  We have nice software but nobody knows ;) Further Information on OpenSync can be found on the OpenSync Website: www.opensync.org This Interview was done by Arne Babenhauserheide in April 2006 via e-mail and KOffice on behalf of himself, the OpenSource Community, SpreadKDE.org and the Dot (dot.kde.org).
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Original:  A pdf-version with pictures can be found at opensync-interview.pdf (OpenDocument version  opensync-interview.odt) And if you want to make me happy, just take a look at my website and read some of my shortstories , poems and strange ideas or listen to some of my songs. :) Or donate me 10 M€, so I will never have to work again and can commit all my time to my hobbies :) - Arne Babenhauserheide (draketo.de
Revised:  A pdf-version with pictures can be found at opensync-interview.pdf (OpenDocument version : opensync-interview.odt) And if you want to make me happy, just take a look at my website and read some of my shortstories , poems and strange ideas or listen to some of my songs. :) Or donate me 10 M€, so I will never have to work again and can commit all my time to my hobbies :) - Arne Babenhauserheide (draketo.de
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Original:  A pdf-version with pictures can be found at opensync-interview.pdf (OpenDocument version  opensync-interview.odt) And if you want to make me happy, just take a look at my website and read some of my shortstories , poems and strange ideas or listen to some of my songs. :) Or donate me 10 M€, so I will never have to work again and can commit all my time to my hobbies :) - Arne Babenhauserheide (draketo.de
Revised:  A pdf-version with pictures can be found at opensync-interview.pdf (OpenDocument version opensync-interview.odt) And if you want to make me happy, just take a look at my website and read some of my short stories , poems and strange ideas or listen to some of my songs. :) Or donate me 10 M€, so I will never have to work again and can commit all my time to my hobbies :) - Arne Babenhauserheide (draketo.de
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Original: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers This interview intends to get you some insight into OpenSync, the upcoming free unified synching solution for the free desktop .
Revised:  "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers This interview intends to get you some insight into OpenSync, the upcoming free unified synching solution for the free desktop .
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Original: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers This interview intends to get you some insight into OpenSync, the upcoming free unified synching solution for the free desktop .
Revised: OpenSync synching on the free desktop This interview intends to get you some insight into OpenSync, the upcoming free unified synching solution for the free desktop .
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Original: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers This interview intends to get you some insight into OpenSync, the upcoming free unified synching solution for the free desktop .
Revised: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers This interview intends to provide some insight into OpenSync, the upcoming free unified synching solution for the free desktop .
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Original: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers This interview intends to get you some insight into OpenSync, the upcoming free unified synching solution for the free desktop .
Revised: OpenSync synching on the free desktop "It's the first time I feel well when thinking about synching." - Cornelius, one of the OpenSync developers This interview intends to get you some insight into OpenSync, an upcoming free unified synching solution for the free desktop .
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Original:   Hi Cornelius, Armin and Tobias.
Revised:  Basics Hi Cornelius, Armin and Tobias.
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Original:  So there's one key-question before I move deeper into the details of OpenSync: Basics What does OpenSync accomplish, that noone did before?
Revised:  So there's one key-question before I move deeper into the details of OpenSync: What does OpenSync accomplish, that noone did before?
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Original:  I hope it got your mouth wet on the thought of the upcoming OpenSync.
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Original:  The delegation was critisised for failing to comment on questions relating to America's alleged secret prisons.
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Original: 300px|Emo and Proog, the lead characters of the movie The 3D animated short film Elephants Dream, formerly known as Orange Project, was released to the Internet yesterday.
Revised:  The 3D animated short film Elephants Dream, formerly known as Orange Project, was released to the Internet yesterday.
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Original: The 3D animated short film Elephants Dream, formerly known as Orange Project , was released to the Internet yesterday.
Revised: The 3D animated short film Elephants Dream, formerly known as Project Orange , was released to the Internet yesterday.
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Original: See also: Interview with Ton Roosendaal about Elephants Dream and free content movies The 3D animated short film Elephants Dream, formerly known as Project Orange, was released to the Internet yesterday.
Revised:  The 3D animated short film Elephants Dream, formerly known as Project Orange, was released to the Internet yesterday.
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Original:  Further information Elephants Dream Website and Downloa
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Original:  A bonobo. An experiment was performed using bonobos ' and orangutans' .
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Original:  A bonobo. An experiment was performed using bonobos ' and orangutans' .
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Original:  The monkeys were then taken to a room next door and allowed to take whatever tools they chose.
Revised:  The apes were then taken to a room next door and allowed to take whatever tools they chose.
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Original:  After repeating the same test several times with each monkey , researcher began to see that most monkeys woul begin to use the right tool for the job.
Revised:  After repeating the same test several times with each ape , researcher began to see that most monkeys woul begin to use the right tool for the job.
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Original:  After repeating the same test several times with each monkey , researcher began to see that most monkeys woul begin to use the right tool for the job.
Revised:  After repeating the same test several times with each monkey , researcher began to see that most apes would begin to use the right tool for the job.
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