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Original:  Raymond soon assumes the government of the principality  .
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Original:  1070s A Byzantine general of Armenian origin, Philaretos Brachamios, tooks control of large territories in northern Syria.
Revised:  1070s A Byzantine general of Armenian origin, Philaretos Brachamios, takes control of large territories in northern Syria.
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Original: Areas in which it is used CGA has been shown to be useful for treating people who are hospitalized, in care homes, URL "Does Comprehensive Geriatric Assessment have a role in Care Homes?", Gordon, Adam L. PhD Thesis.
Revised: Areas in which it is used CGA has been shown to be useful for treating people who are hospitalized, in care homes, "Does Comprehensive Geriatric Assessment have a role in Care Homes?", Gordon, Adam L. PhD Thesis.
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Original:  URL "Comprehensive Geriatric Assessment Toolkit for Primary Care Practitioners", BGS, 4 February 2016.
Revised:  "Comprehensive Geriatric Assessment Toolkit for Primary Care Practitioners", BGS, 4 February 2016.
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Original:  URL "Comprehensive Geriatric Assessment Position Statement", American Geriatrics Society, 5 September 2008.
Revised:  "Comprehensive Geriatric Assessment Position Statement", American Geriatrics Society, 5 September 2008.
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Original:  Retrieved on 4 October 2018.
Revised:  Retrieved 4 October 2018.
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Original: She was formerly associated with the American Indian Studies Program at Illinois.
Revised: They were formerly associated with the American Indian Studies Program at Illinois.
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Original:  In the wake of the Illinois administration's failure to hire Steven Salaita into the program, which she had championed as acting director of the program, she considered offers to move to three other universities.
Revised:  In the wake of the Illinois administration's failure to hire Steven Salaita into the program, which They had championed as acting director of the program, she considered offers to move to three other universities.
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Original:  In the wake of the Illinois administration's failure to hire Steven Salaita into the program, which she had championed as acting director of the program, she considered offers to move to three other universities.
Revised:  In the wake of the Illinois administration's failure to hire Steven Salaita into the program, which she had championed as acting director of the program, they considered offers to move to three other universities.
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Original:  However, the University of Illinois persuaded her to stay and provided her an alternative position in the English and Gender and Women's Studies departments.
Revised:  However, the University of Illinois persuaded them to stay and provided her an alternative position in the English and Gender and Women's Studies departments.
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Original:  However, the University of Illinois persuaded her to stay and provided her an alternative position in the English and Gender and Women's Studies departments.
Revised:  However, the University of Illinois persuaded her to stay and provided them an alternative position in the English and Gender and Women's Studies departments.
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Original:  She is the co-editor of the Critical Insurgencies series for Northwestern University Press.
Revised:  They are the co-editor of the Critical Insurgencies series for Northwestern University Press.
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Original: 20th-century Native Americans Category:21st-century Native Americans Category:American academics of English literature Category:American women academics Category:Chickasaw people Category:Native American academics Category:Native American women academics Category:University of Hawaii at Manoa faculty Category:University of Illinois at Urbana–Champaign faculty Category:University of Iowa alumni Category:Women's studies academics Category:Year of birth missing (living peopl
Revised: 20th-century Native Americans Category:21st-century Native Americans Category:American academics of English literature Category:American women academics Category:Chickasaw people Category:Native American academics Category:Native American women academics Category:University of Hawaii at Manoa faculty Category:University of Illinois at Urbana–Champaign faculty Category:University of Iowa alumni Category:Women's studies academics Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:20th-century American peop
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Original: 21st-century Native Americans Category:American academics of English literature Category:American women academics Category:Chickasaw people Category:Native American academics Category:Native American women academics Category:University of Hawaii at Manoa faculty Category:University of Illinois at Urbana–Champaign faculty Category:University of Iowa alumni Category:Women's studies academics Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:20th-century American peop
Revised: 21st-century Native Americans Category:American academics of English literature Category:American women academics Category:Chickasaw people Category:Native American academics Category:Native American women academics Category:University of Hawaii at Manoa faculty Category:University of Illinois at Urbana–Champaign faculty Category:University of Iowa alumni Category:Women's studies academics Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:20th-century American people Category:20th-century Native American wom
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Original: American academics of English literature Category:American women academics Category:Chickasaw people Category:Native American academics Category:Native American women academics Category:University of Hawaii at Manoa faculty Category:University of Illinois at Urbana–Champaign faculty Category:University of Iowa alumni Category:Women's studies academics Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:20th-century American people Category:20th-century Native American  wom
Revised: American academics of English literature Category:American women academics Category:Chickasaw people Category:Native American academics Category:Native American women academics Category:University of Hawaii at Manoa faculty Category:University of Illinois at Urbana–Champaign faculty Category:University of Iowa alumni Category:Women's studies academics Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:20th-century American people Category:20th-century Native American women Category:21st-century Native American wom
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Original:  9 April 1886 - 21 February 1965), also known as Ping Chih, was a Chinese zoologist of Manchu ancestry .
Revised:  9 April 1886 - 21 February 1965), was a Chinese zoologist of Manchu ancestry .
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Original:  Life Biography External links Biography Chief Henry Caruthers Roman Nose (1856 – 1917) was a  Southern Cheyenne Chief.
Revised:  Biography Chief Henry Caruthers Roman Nose (1856 – 1917) was a Southern Cheyenne Chief.
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Original:  Life Biography External links Biography Chief Henry Caruthers Roman Nose (1856 – 1917) was a  Southern Cheyenne Chief.
Revised:  Life Biography External links Chief Henry Roman Nose (1856 – 1917) was a Southern Cheyenne Chief.
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Original:  Life Biography External links Biography Chief Henry Caruthers Roman Nose (1856 – 1917) was a  Southern Cheyenne Chief.
Revised:  Life Biography External links Biography Chief Henry Caruthers Roman Nose (1856 – 1917) was a highly respected Southern Cheyenne Chief.
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Original:  Roman Nose's life spanned very turbulent timesfor the Cheyenne people, and he was known as a peacemaker who helped his people make the transition from a nomadic lifestyle to a settled existence.  
Revised:  Living during turbulent times, Roman Nose wais recognized for facilitating a peaceful transition to a non-nomadic way of life, while retaining elements of his Cheyenne culture. He was a vocal proponent of obtaining education and training. 
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Original:  Living during turbulent times, Roman Nose wais recognized for facilitating a peaceful transition to a non-nomadic way of life, while retaining elements of his Cheyenne culture.
Revised:  Living during turbulent times, Roman Nose was recognized for facilitating a peaceful transition to a non-nomadic way of life, while retaining elements of his Cheyenne culture.
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Original: Martin Klyne (born March 6, 1957) is a Canadian lawyer, corporate executive, and politician , who was appointed to the Senate of Canada in September 2018."'Nervous and excited': Regina's Marty Klyne named to Canadian senate".
Revised: Martin Klyne (born March 6, 1957) is a Canadian Senator and former corporate executive , who was appointed to the Senate of Canada in September 2018."'Nervous and excited': Regina's Marty Klyne named to Canadian senate".
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Original:  He is of Cree and Métis heritage.
Revised:  He proud of his Cree Métis heritage.
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Original:  Klyne graduated with a business administration degree from the University of Regina in 1986.
Revised:  After obtaining his degree from the University of Regina in 1986.
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Original:  Klyne graduated with a business administration degree from the University of Regina in 1986.
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Original:  He was a manager with the Royal Trust Corporation of Canada and the Mercantile Bank of Canada before serving as president and CEO of the Regina Regional Economic Development Authority and the SaskNative Economic Development Corporation .
Revised:  He was a manager with the Mercantile Bank of Canada before serving as president and CEO of the Regina Regional Economic Development Authority and the SaskNative Economic Development Corporation .
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Original:  He served as publisher and CEO of the Saskatoon StarPhoenix and Regina Leader-Post from 2008 to 2013.
Revised:  Klyne has received multiple recognitions from various individuals and organizations. Additionally, he has served and currently serves on many boards.
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Original:  He is a former president and CEO of   the Saskatchewan Gaming Corporation and is the former chief executive officer of the RCMP Heritage Centre in Regina.
Revised:  Former Occupations the Saskatchewan Gaming Corporation and is the former chief executive officer of the RCMP Heritage Centre in Regina.
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Original:    References Category: Lawyers in Saskatchewan Category: Canadian senators from Saskatchewan Category:Independent Canadian senators Category:Politicians from Calgary Category:Politicians from Regina, Saskatchewan Category:First Nations politicians Category:Cree people Category:Living people Category:21st-century Canadian newspaper publishers (people) Category:Canadian corporate directors Category:Canadian chief executives Category:Canadian sports executives and administrators Category:1957 birt
Revised:  References Category: Canadian senators from Saskatchewan Category:Independent Canadian senators Category:Politicians from Calgary Category:Politicians from Regina, Saskatchewan Category:First Nations politicians Category:Cree people Category:Living people Category:21st-century Canadian newspaper publishers (people) Category:Canadian corporate directors Category:Canadian chief executives Category:Canadian sports executives and administrators Category:1957 birt
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Original:    References Category: Lawyers in Saskatchewan Category: Canadian senators from Saskatchewan Category:Independent Canadian senators Category:Politicians from Calgary Category:Politicians from Regina, Saskatchewan Category:First Nations politicians Category:Cree people Category:Living people Category:21st-century Canadian newspaper publishers (people) Category:Canadian corporate directors Category:Canadian chief executives Category:Canadian sports executives and administrators Category:1957 birt
Revised:  References Category: Lawyers in Saskatchewan Category: Canadian senators from Saskatchewan Category:Independent Canadian senators Category:Politicians from Regina, Saskatchewan Category:First Nations politicians Category:Cree people Category:Living people Category:21st-century Canadian newspaper publishers (people) Category:Canadian corporate directors Category:Canadian chief executives Category:Canadian sports executives and administrators Category:1957 birt
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Original: Martin Klyne (born March 6, 1957) is a Canadian Senator and former corporate executive, who was appointed to the Senate of Canada in September 2018."'Nervous and excited': Regina's Marty Klyne named to Canadian senate".
Revised: Martin Klyne (born March 6, 1957) is a Canadian senator and former corporate executive, who was appointed to the Senate of Canada in September 2018."'Nervous and excited': Regina's Marty Klyne named to Canadian senate".
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Original:  Education Klyne graduated from the University of Regina with Distinction with a degree Business Administration , majoring in finance in 1986.
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Original:  Education Klyne graduated from the University of Regina with Distinction with a degree Business Administration , majoring in finance in 1986.
Revised:  Education Klyne graduated from the University of Regina with Distinction with a degree in business administration , majoring in finance in 1986.
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Original:  Former Occupations RCMP Heritage Centre Klyne served as the Chief Executive Officer for the centre from March 2017-August 2018.
Revised:  Career RCMP Heritage Centre Klyne served as the Chief Executive Officer for the centre from March 2017-August 2018.
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Original:  Former Occupations RCMP Heritage Centre Klyne served as the Chief Executive Officer for the centre from March 2017-August 2018.
Revised:  Former Occupations RCMP Heritage Centre Klyne served as the chief executive officer for the centre from March 2017-August 2018.
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Original:  Queen City Sports and Entertainment Group (Operating as Regina Pats Hockey Club) From May 2015-January 2017, Klyne was the Chief Operating Officer for the Regina Pats Hockey Club, where he focused on the operations of the organization with the President of the hockey club, while working with the General Manager of Hockey Operations, at the time John Paddock .
Revised:  Queen City Sports and Entertainment Group From May 2015-January 2017, Klyne was the Chief Operating Officer for the Regina Pats Hockey Club, where he focused on the operations of the organization with the President of the hockey club, while working with the General Manager of Hockey Operations, at the time John Paddock .
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Original:  Queen City Sports and Entertainment Group (Operating as Regina Pats Hockey Club) From May 2015-January 2017, Klyne was the Chief Operating Officer for the Regina Pats Hockey Club, where he focused on the operations of the organization with the President of the hockey club, while working with the General Manager of Hockey Operations, at the time John Paddock .
Revised:  Queen City Sports and Entertainment Group (Operating as Regina Pats Hockey Club) From May 2015-January 2017, Klyne was the chief operating officer for the Regina Pats Hockey Club, where he focused on the operations of the organization with the President of the hockey club, while working with the General Manager of Hockey Operations, at the time John Paddock .
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Original:  Queen City Sports and Entertainment Group (Operating as Regina Pats Hockey Club) From May 2015-January 2017, Klyne was the Chief Operating Officer for the Regina Pats Hockey Club, where he focused on the operations of the organization with the President of the hockey club, while working with the General Manager of Hockey Operations, at the time John Paddock .
Revised:  Queen City Sports and Entertainment Group (Operating as Regina Pats Hockey Club) From May 2015-January 2017, Klyne was the Chief Operating Officer for the Regina Pats Hockey Club, where he focused on the operations of the organization with the president of the hockey club, while working with the General Manager of Hockey Operations, at the time John Paddock .
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Original:  Queen City Sports and Entertainment Group (Operating as Regina Pats Hockey Club) From May 2015-January 2017, Klyne was the Chief Operating Officer for the Regina Pats Hockey Club, where he focused on the operations of the organization with the President of the hockey club, while working with the General Manager of Hockey Operations, at the time John Paddock .
Revised:  Queen City Sports and Entertainment Group (Operating as Regina Pats Hockey Club) From May 2015-January 2017, Klyne was the Chief Operating Officer for the Regina Pats Hockey Club, where he focused on the operations of the organization with the President of the hockey club, while working with John Paddock, the general manager of hockey operations .
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Original:  He also built the one  the best operating performances for Canadian newspaper markets when compared to larger newspaper market across Canada.
Revised:  He also built the one of the best operating performances for Canadian newspaper markets when compared to larger newspaper market across Canada.
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Original:  He is a proud Cree Métis citizen.
Revised:  He is a Cree Métis citizen.
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Original:  After obtaining his degree from the University of Regina ('86) in business administration with a major in finance, he quickly became a manager with the Mercantile Bank of Canada, currently known as Toronto-Dominion Bank, and continued his career from there . Klyne has received multiple recognitions from various individuals and organizations.
Revised:  After obtaining his degree from the University of Regina ('86) in business administration with a major in finance, he quickly became a manager with the Mercantile Bank of Canada, currently known as Toronto-Dominion Bank, and continued his career from there Klyne has received multiple recognitions from various individuals and organizations.
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Original: Principality of Maimbung Sulu that time was called Lupah Sug and ruled by the Indianised Hindu principality of Maimbung, populated by Buranun people (or Budanon, literally means "mountain-dwellers"), was first ruled by a certain rajah who assumed the title Rajah Sipad the Older.
Revised: Hindu principality of Maimbung Sulu that time was called Lupah Sug and ruled by the Indianised Hindu principality of Maimbung, populated by Buranun people (or Budanon, literally means "mountain-dwellers"), was first ruled by a certain rajah who assumed the title Rajah Sipad the Older.
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Original:  Currently, in addition to developing his artistic career, he is a lecturer and researcher at the Faculty of Science of Leiden University.
Revised:  Currently, in addition to pursuing his artistic career, he is a lecturer and researcher at the Faculty of Science of Leiden University.
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Original:  As part of SONAR 2014 van der Heide realized his composition Spectral Diffractions for the Barcelona Pavilion by Mies van der Rohe.
Revised:  As part of Sónar 2014 van der Heide realized his composition Spectral Diffractions for the Barcelona Pavilion by Mies van der Rohe.
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Original:  Ash International, 2000 Just about Now, V2 label, 2000 Meltdown of Control, Staalplaat MAV, 2000 Wavescape, Staalplaat stmcd 025, 2003 Anthology of Dutch Electronic Music 1999–2010, BASTA, 2011 Aoyama Noise – Live at Cay, Airplane Label, 2011 Spectral Diffractions, Fundacio EINA, 2014, , 2014 Pneumatic Sound Field, ALKU, 2014
Revised:  Ash International, 2000 Just about Now, V2 label, 2000 Meltdown of Control, Staalplaat MAV, 2000 Wavescape, Staalplaat stmcd 025, 2003 Anthology of Dutch Electronic Music 1999–2010, BASTA, 2011 Aoyama Noise – Live at Cay, Airplane Label, 2011 Spectral Diffractions, Fundacio EINA, 2014, Pneumatic Sound Field, ALKU, 2014
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Original:  For the exhibition of his installation Pneumatic Sound Field, part of the Synthetic Times exhibition at the National Art Museum of China (NAMOC) in 2008, Lars Spuybroek designed at dedicated pavilion for the work.
Revised:  For the exhibition of his installation Pneumatic Sound Field, part of the Synthetic Times exhibition at the National Art Museum of China (NAMOC) in 2008, Lars Spuybroek designed a dedicated pavilion for the work.
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Original:  For the exhibition of his installation Pneumatic Sound Field, part of the Synthetic Times exhibition at the National Art Museum of China (NAMOC) in 2008, Lars Spuybroek designed a dedicated pavilion for the work .
Revised:  For the exhibition of his installation Pneumatic Sound Field, part of the Synthetic Times exhibition at the National Art Museum of China (NAMOC) in 2008, Lars Spuybroek designed a dedicated pavilion .
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Original:  Ash International, 2000 Just about Now, V2 label, 2000 Meltdown of Control, Staalplaat MAV, 2000 Wavescape, Staalplaat stmcd 025, 2003 Anthology of Dutch Electronic Music 1999–2010, BASTA, 2011 Aoyama Noise – Live at Cay, Airplane Label, 2011 Spectral Diffractions, Fundacio EINA, 2014, Pneumatic Sound Field, ALKU, 2014340x340px|The interactive Son-O-House in Son en Breugel, the Netherlands
Revised:  Ash International, 2000 Just about Now, V2 label, 2000 Meltdown of Control, Staalplaat MAV, 2000 Wavescape, Staalplaat stmcd 025, 2003 Anthology of Dutch Electronic Music 1999–2010, BASTA, 2011 Aoyama Noise – Live at Cay, Airplane Label, 2011 Spectral Diffractions, Fundacio EINA, 2014, Pneumatic Sound Field, ALKU, 2014
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Original: Life He was the son of Edward Sumpter and Alice  (Rowe) Snow.
Revised: Life He was the son of Edward Sumpter and Alice Nichsols (Rowe) Snow.
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Original:  He graduated from Harvard University, and Boston University, with an M.A. Snow married Anna-Myrle Haegg, on July 8, 1932, and they had a daughter Dorothy Caroline  .
Revised:  He graduated from Harvard University, and Boston University, with an M.A. Snow married Anna Myrle Haegg, on July 8, 1932, and they had a daughter Dorothy Caroline .
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Original:  From 1900 to Autumn 1901 he was a doctor in Verkhneudinsk, and from 1906 to 1913 he was in Paris, where he worked with professor Guyon and subsequently at the Pasteur Institute.
Revised:  From 1900 to autumn 1901 he was a doctor in Verkhneudinsk, and from 1906 to 1913 he was in Paris, where he worked with professor Guyon and subsequently at the Pasteur Institute.
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Original:  He helped to organise the 1928 Soviet-German Syphilis Expedition which aimed to tackle the endemic syphilis in Buriat-Mongolia, Bronner's place of birth, and to determine the method of transmission of the disease;
Revised:  Bronner helped to organise the 1928 Soviet-German Syphilis Expedition which aimed to tackle the endemic syphilis in Buriat-Mongolia, Bronner's place of birth, and to determine the method of transmission of the disease;
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Original:  In 1927, he edited Prostitutsiia v Rossii (Prostitution in Russia) with Arkadii Elistratov, professor of police law at Moscow University, and in 1936, his book, La lutte contre la prostitution en URSS (The fight against prostitution in the USSR) revealed that two thirds of prostitutes had been servants.
Revised:  In 1927, Bronner edited Prostitutsiia v Rossii (Prostitution in Russia) with Arkadii Elistratov, professor of police law at Moscow University, and in 1936, his book, La lutte contre la prostitution en URSS (The fight against prostitution in the USSR) revealed that two thirds of prostitutes had been servants.
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