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Original:  Taban's license is currently suspended  
Revised:  Taban's license is currently suspended . 
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Original:  RIA Novosti has stated that this fleet is aging and in urgent need of maintenance and repair work, while Iran blames international sanctions which they claim prevent the import of spare parts except low-quality products from Russia   
Revised:  RIA Novosti has stated that this fleet is aging and in urgent need of maintenance and repair work, while Iran blames international sanctions which they claim prevent the import of spare parts except low-quality products from Russia . 
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Original:  The Russian party to the investigation issues flight is responsible for licensing pilots  
Revised:  The Russian party to the investigation issues flight is responsible for licensing pilots . 
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Original:  The woman, who is currently remaining unidentified, was blind and was aged 93-years-old when her bungalow in Sheffield went on fire as a result of a mistake being made in her kitchen on Sunday afternoon.
Revised:  The woman, who is currently remaining unidentified, was blind and 93-years-old when her bungalow in Sheffield went on fire as a result of a mistake being made in her kitchen on Sunday afternoon.
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Original:  The woman, who is currently remaining unidentified, was blind and was aged 93-years-old when her bungalow in Sheffield went on fire as a result of a mistake being made in her kitchen on Sunday afternoon.
Revised:  The woman, who is currently remaining unidentified, was blind and was aged 93-years-old when her bungalow in Sheffield caught fire as a result of a mistake being made in her kitchen on Sunday afternoon.
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Original:  The woman, who is currently remaining unidentified, was blind and was aged 93-years-old when her bungalow in Sheffield went on fire as a result of a mistake being made in her kitchen on Sunday afternoon.
Revised:  The woman, who is currently remaining unidentified, was blind and was aged 93-years-old when her bungalow in Sheffield went on fire as a result of an accident in her kitchen on Sunday afternoon.
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Original:  When she attempted to put out the fire, the towel dropped to the side of the cooker, in the position of some plastic bags.
Revised:  When she attempted to put out the fire, the towel dropped to the side of the cooker, alongside some plastic bags.
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Original:  A smoke alarm later began to make alert signals ;
Revised:  A smoke alarm sounded ;
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Original:  a nearby resident then heard the alarm and subsequently went to assist.
Revised:  a nearby resident heard the alarm and subsequently went to assist.
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Original:  a nearby resident then heard the alarm and subsequently went to assist.
Revised:  a nearby resident then heard the alarm and went to assist.
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Original:  The neighbour managed to break into the bedroom window of the bungalow in order for the person to be able to get inside the building.
Revised:  The neighbour managed to break into the bedroom window of the bungalow in order to be able to get inside the building.
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Original:  People investigating the fire have come to the conclusion that this particular fire was an accidental one.
Revised:  People investigating the incident have come to the conclusion that this particular fire was an accidental one.
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Original:  The Orange Order organises parades and rallies in support of Ireland being a part of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The Orange Order organises parades and walks in support of Ireland being a part of the United Kingdom.
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Original:  The Orange Order organises parades and rallies in support of Ireland being a part of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The Orange Order organises parades and rallies in support of Northern Ireland staying part of the United Kingdom.
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Original:  The Orange Order organises parades and walks in support of Northern Ireland staying part of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The Orange Order organises parades and rallies in support of Northern Ireland staying part of the United Kingdom.
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Original:  The Orange Order organises parades and walks in support of Northern Ireland staying part of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The Orange Order organises parades and walks in support of Ireland being a part of the United Kingdom.
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Original:  The Orange Order organises parades and rallies in support of Northern Ireland staying part of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The Orange Order organises parades and rallies in support of Ireland being a part of the United Kingdom.
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Original:   A United States  assault helicopter provided assistance to the group, who were in Lashkar Gah, Helmand  . After beting back their attackers the soldiers discovered a fighter with injuries deemed to be so severe that medical aid would be ineffective  .
Revised:  A United States assault helicopter provided assistance to the group, who were in Lashkar Gah, Helmand . After beating back their attackers the soldiers discovered a fighter with injuries deemed to be so severe that medical aid would be ineffective .
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Original:   Captain Semrau was not investigated for two months, when his superiors heard of the alleged killing.
Revised:  Troops then moved on and the man's body was never recovered. Captain Semrau was not investigated for two months, when his superiors heard of the alleged killing.
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Original:  I can't remember any such incidents in the past 50 years and in the Second World War, I don't believe there was such a court martial.  
Revised:  I can't remember any such incidents in the past 50 years and in the Second World War, I don't believe there was such a court martial. " 
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Original:  Quote Coupled with the Government's public attacks on Mr. Colvin and his testimony before the Special Committee on the Canadian Mission in Afghanistan (the "Committee"), our client is left with the reasonable belief that the denial of further legal indemnification is a reprisal for his participation before the Committee and the Commission.
Revised:  Coupled with the Government's public attacks on Mr. Colvin and his testimony before the Special Committee on the Canadian Mission in Afghanistan (the "Committee"), our client is left with the reasonable belief that the denial of further legal indemnification is a reprisal for his participation before the Committee and the Commission.
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Original:  Quote Coupled with the Government's public attacks on Mr. Colvin and his testimony before the Special Committee on the Canadian Mission in Afghanistan (the "Committee"), our client is left with the reasonable belief that the denial of further legal indemnification is a reprisal for his participation before the Committee and the Commission.
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Original: In a letter to the Military Police Complaints Commission (MPCC), Mr. Colvin's Toronto lawyer Owen Rees expresses concern over the government's complete failure to make any response - either to Mr. Colvin or to the MPCC.
Revised: In a letter to the Military Police Complaints Commission (MPCC), Colvin's Toronto lawyer Owen Rees expresses concern over the government's complete failure to make any response - either to Mr. Colvin or to the MPCC.
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Original: In a letter to the Military Police Complaints Commission (MPCC), Mr. Colvin's Toronto lawyer Owen Rees expresses concern over the government's complete failure to make any response - either to Mr. Colvin or to the MPCC.
Revised: In a letter to the Military Police Complaints Commission (MPCC), Mr. Colvin's Toronto lawyer Owen Rees expresses concern over the government's complete failure to make any response - either to Colvin or to the MPCC.
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Original:  The government stopped paying Mr. Colvin's legal fees in November after his damning testimony before the House of Commons's special committee on Afghanistan.
Revised:  The government stopped paying Colvin's legal fees in November after his damning testimony before the House of Commons's special committee on Afghanistan.
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Original:  The special committee had called Mr. Colvin to testify in their ongoing into what Canadian Forces knew, or should have known, about the fate of detainees turned over to Afghan authorities due to their responsibilities to the Geneva Convention.
Revised:  The special committee had called Colvin to testify in their ongoing into what Canadian Forces knew, or should have known, about the fate of detainees turned over to Afghan authorities due to their responsibilities to the Geneva Convention.
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Original:  Mr Colvin testified he repeatedly warned officials regarding the treatment of prisoners by Afghan authorities, and presented evidence the government was aware of circumstances.
Revised:  Colvin testified he repeatedly warned officials regarding the treatment of prisoners by Afghan authorities, and presented evidence the government was aware of circumstances.
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Original:  This latest revelation comes as the Canadian Parliament has been prorogued for three months, until after the Vancouver Olympics, by the minority Harper government, with some members of the opposition parties pointing to Mr. Colvin's testimony and the whole Afghan detainee issue as the reason to dismiss the legislature.
Revised:  This latest revelation comes as the Canadian Parliament has been prorogued for three months, until after the Vancouver Olympics, by the minority Harper government, with some members of the opposition parties pointing to Colvin's testimony and the whole Afghan detainee issue as the reason to dismiss the legislature.
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Original:  As a federal civil servant summoned by Parliament regarding his official work Mr. Colvin is entitled to legal representation.
Revised:  As a federal civil servant summoned by Parliament regarding his official work Colvin is entitled to legal representation.
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Original:  The government agreed his earlier government-employed lawyer could not fairly represent both Mr. Colvin and the government, but has refused to provide funding for any other legal representation despite the ongoing MPCC investigation.
Revised:  The government agreed his earlier government-employed lawyer could not fairly represent both Colvin and the government, but has refused to provide funding for any other legal representation despite the ongoing MPCC investigation.
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Original:  Mr. Colvin continues to hold his position as head of intelligence at the Canadian Embassy in Washington
Revised:  Colvin continues to hold his position as head of intelligence at the Canadian Embassy in Washington
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Original:  The other occupent of the vehicle was an 18-year-old woman.
Revised:  The other occupant of the vehicle was an 18-year-old woman.
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Original: Tourism Minister Martin Perez says the government may send helicopters to evacuate tourists and locals from Machu Picchu Pueblo, the town next to the citadel.
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Original:  As troops clash with Islamic millitants the European Union has said it will train 2,000 more soldiers for the country     
Revised:  As troops clash with Islamic millitants the European Union has said it will train 2,000 more soldiers for the country . 
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Original:  As troops clash with Islamic millitants the European Union has said it will train 2,000 more soldiers for the country.
Revised:  As troops clash with Islamic fighters the European Union has said it will train 2,000 more soldiers for the country.
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Original:  Britain, Slovenia, Greece and Hungary are expected to particiapte , according to Reuters
Revised:  Britain, Slovenia, Greece and Hungary are expected to participate , according to Reuters
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Original:  A joint statement read: " " The EU should ... continue to help stabilise Somalia by providing support to vital and priority areas such as the security sector, development, assistance to the population and capacity-building support.
Revised:  A joint statement read: " The EU should ... continue to help stabilise Somalia by providing support to vital and priority areas such as the security sector, development, assistance to the population and capacity-building support.
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Original: After an argument  the boyfriend, Disc Jockey Lee Scullion (31), went for an afternoon nap in their hotel room , when he awoke he discovered he  could not open his eyes and that his watch was glued to his wrist.
Revised: After an argument , the boyfriend, Disc Jockey Lee Scullion (31), went for an afternoon nap in their hotel room , when he awoke he discovered he could not open his eyes and that his watch was glued to his wrist.
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Original: After an argument  the boyfriend, Disc Jockey Lee Scullion (31), went for an afternoon nap in their hotel room , when he awoke he discovered he  could not open his eyes and that his watch was glued to his wrist.
Revised: After an argument the boyfriend, Disc Jockey Lee Scullion (31), went for an afternoon nap in their hotel room . When he woke up, he could not open his eyes and that his watch was glued to his wrist.
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Original: After an argument  the boyfriend, Disc Jockey Lee Scullion (31), went for an afternoon nap in their hotel room , when he awoke he discovered he  could not open his eyes and that his watch was glued to his wrist.
Revised: After an argument the boyfriend, Disc Jockey Lee Scullion (31), went for an afternoon nap in their hotel room , when he awoke he discovered he discovered that he could not open his eyes and that his watch was glued to his wrist.
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Original:   Laura Dunn (26) who currently is  working in a care home  said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
Revised:  In addition, his girlfriend Laura Dunn (26) who currently is working in a care home said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
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Original:   Laura Dunn (26) who currently is  working in a care home  said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
Revised:  Laura Dunn (26) is reported to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera, while he is said to have burned her passport. working in a care home said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
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Original:   Laura Dunn (26) who currently is  working in a care home  said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
Revised:  Laura Dunn (26) who currently is working in a care home , said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
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Original:   Laura Dunn (26) who currently is  working in a care home  said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
Revised:  Laura Dunn (26) who currently is working in a care home said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." She also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
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Original:   Laura Dunn (26) who currently is  working in a care home  said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
Revised:  Laura Dunn (26) who currently is working in a care home said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
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Original:   Laura Dunn (26) who currently is  working in a care home  said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . Laura also is said to have smashed Lee's £650 ($1,128.47) digital camera and he is said to have burned her passport
Revised:  Laura Dunn (26) who currently is working in a care home said "he wouldn't give me the attention I deserved" and that she "decided to teach him a lesson to remind him not to look at other women." she also said she hoped her career would not be affected by the fight . 
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Original: Both gentlemen had to be transported to Nobles Hospital , howeverit has been said by police officers that neither of the two suffered from life-threatening injuries.
Revised: Both gentlemen had to be transported to Nobles Hospital ; however, police officers noted that neither of the two suffered from life-threatening injuries.
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Original:  One of the two men was driving a Toyota Celica and the other man was driving in a Renault Laguna.
Revised:  One of the two men was driving a Toyota Celica and the other a Renault Laguna.
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Original:  She said that the CPS had considered the new draft policy, and decided that they could not risk not prosecuting if there was a possibility that it could have been murder or manslaughter.
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Original: Bridget Gilderdale, a mother from Stonegate, East Sussex, has been found not guilty of the attempted murder of her daughter, Lynn Gilderdale—a 31-year-old sufferer of chronic fatigue syndrome (more commonly known as ME)—after her daughter was found dead at their home on 4 December, having been killed using a concoction of pills and morphene .
Revised: Bridget Gilderdale, a mother from Stonegate, East Sussex, has been found not guilty of the attempted murder of her daughter, Lynn Gilderdale—a 31-year-old sufferer of chronic fatigue syndrome (more commonly known as ME)—after her daughter was found dead at their home on 4 December, having been killed using a concoction of pills and morphine .
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Original:  " There is no dispute that you were a caring and loving mother and that you considered that you were acting in the best interests of your daughter."
Revised:  There is no dispute that you were a caring and loving mother and that you considered that you were acting in the best interests of your daughter."
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Original:  Since then, he says, the plane has flown for nearly thirty hours and is exceeding expectations  
Revised:  Since then, he says, the plane has flown for nearly thirty hours and is exceeding expectations . 
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Original: The incident occurred in Benin City, located in Edo state, when Reverend Peter Imasue was reportedly ambushed on his way home from a church.
Revised: The incident occurred in Benin City, located in Edo state, where Reverend Peter Imasue was reportedly ambushed on his way home from a church.
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Original:  The abduction comes amidst recent tensions between Muslims and Christians in neighbouring Nigeria , which saw fierce clashes a week ago and five hundred people dead, mainly in the city of Jos
Revised:  The abduction comes amidst recent tensions between Muslims and Christians in the country , which saw fierce clashes a week ago and five hundred people dead, mainly in the city of Jos
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Original:  Last year six children were killed by milk contaminated with the chemical and 300,000 fell ill   
Revised:  Last year six children were killed by milk contaminated with the chemical and 300,000 fell ill . 
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Original:  Last November, two men were executed for their roles in selling milk tainted with the chemical, which was largely distributed by Samlu Corp, a company that has since been liquidised    .
Revised:  Last November, two men were executed for their roles in selling milk tainted with the chemical, which was largely distributed by Samlu Corp, a company that has since been liquidised . .
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Original:  The new products we are planning to release this year are very strong, starting this week with a major new product that we're really excited about.  [ 
Revised:  The new products we are planning to release this year are very strong, starting this week with a major new product that we're really excited about. " [ 
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Original:  The new products we are planning to release this year are very strong, starting this week with a major new product that we're really excited about.  [ 
Revised:  The new products we are planning to release this year are very strong, starting this week with a major new product that we're really excited about. [... 
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Original:  Analysts polled  the Thomson Reuters, however, forecast earnings of $2.08 a share.
Revised:  Analysts polled by the Thomson Reuters, however, forecast earnings of $2.08 a share.
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Original:  The move comes after Cadbury's board recommended accepting a takeover bid by United States firm Kraft that valued the company at £11.9 billion sterling  
Revised:  The move comes after Cadbury's board recommended accepting a takeover bid by United States firm Kraft that valued the company at £11.9 billion sterling . 
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Original:  However, on Friday Hershey decided not to attempt to purchase Cadbury, who are most famous for Dairy Milk chocolates   
Revised:  However, on Friday Hershey decided not to attempt to purchase Cadbury, who are most famous for Dairy Milk chocolates . 
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Original:  "The final offer's value will change as the Kraft Foods share price and the USD/GBP exchange rate change," explained Kraft  
Revised:  "The final offer's value will change as the Kraft Foods share price and the USD/GBP exchange rate change," explained Kraft . 
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