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Original:  Stephen Fried, The new rabbi: a congregation searches for its leader, 2002, p. 57Engaging Generation Aleph: A Resource for Young Adults in the Synagogue, Union of American Hebrew Congregations, ed., 1997, p. 81 (However other organizations specifically for young professionals insist that they are not "singles groups".
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Original:  Engaging Generation Aleph: A Resource for Young Adults in the Synagogue, Union of American Hebrew Congregations, ed., 1997, p. 96 )
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Original: Coupland, p.82 From the two ships, Alaugpaya managed to put his hands on 35 ships guns (24 pounders), five filed guns, 1300 muskets, and a large quantity of ammunitions.
Revised: Coupland, p.82 From the two ships, Alaugpaya managed to put his hands on 35 ships guns (24 pounders), five field guns, 1300 muskets, and a large quantity of ammunitions.
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Original:  When they reached old age, the French soldiers were able to retire  Shwebo villages, with the spiritual support of a priest.
Revised:  When they reached old age, the French soldiers were able to retire in Shwebo villages, with the spiritual support of a priest.
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Original:  Coupland, p.78 Governor Saunders of Madras attempted to counter the French moves in the region by sending a military force to survey the island of Negrais under Captain Thomas Taylor.
Revised:  Governor Saunders of Madras attempted to counter the French moves in the region by sending a military force to survey the island of Negrais under Captain Thomas Taylor.
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Original:  Coupland, p.79 The Mons firmly opposed these attempts at British encroachment under the counsel of Sieur de Bruno, who had considerable influence at the Mon court and was especially on excellent terms with the Heir Apparent.
Revised:  The Mons firmly opposed these attempts at British encroachment under the counsel of Sieur de Bruno, who had considerable influence at the Mon court and was especially on excellent terms with the Heir Apparent.
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Original:  Coupland, p.79 Saunders finally decided to occupy Negrais forcibly, occupying the island on 26 April 1753.
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Original:  Coupland, p.79 Participation in the Burman-Mon conflict [[File:MyanmarYangon.png|Sieur de Bruno helped the Mons organize the defense of Syriam against the Burmese.
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Original:  Coupland, p.78 The Burmese soon threatened the capital of Pegu, as well as the city of Syriam.
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Original: Findlay, Page 277 Alaungpaya on the other hand was asking the British for guns and ammunitions.
Revised: Findlay, p.277 Alaungpaya on the other hand was asking the British for guns and ammunitions.
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Original:  The French captains were killed and the 200 sailors forced to join the Burmese armyCoupland, p.82History of Burma By Harvey G. E. p.231 Sieur de Bruno was roasted to death.
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Original:  Coupland, p.82 From the two ships, Alaugpaya managed to put his hands on 35 ships guns (24 pounders), five field guns, 1300 muskets, and a large quantity of ammunitions.
Revised:  From the two ships, Alaugpaya managed to put his hands on 35 ships guns (24 pounders), five field guns, 1300 muskets, and a large quantity of ammunitions.
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Original:  History of Burma By Harvey G. E. p.231 They became an elite corps, which was to play an important role in the Burmese battles against the Siamese and the Manchus.
Revised:  They became an elite corps, which was to play an important role in the Burmese battles against the Siamese and the Manchus.
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Original:  Findlay, p.277 One of them, the Chevalier Milard, was ultimately nominated Captain of the Guard and Master of the Ordnance for the Konbaung dynasty.
Revised:  One of them, the Chevalier Milard, was ultimately nominated Captain of the Guard and Master of the Ordnance for the Konbaung dynasty.
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Original:  Findlay, p.277 When they reached old age, the French soldiers were able to retire in Shwebo villages, with the spiritual support of a priest.
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Original:  History of Burma By Harvey G. E. p.231 To this day, some Catholic villages are still extant in the area where an awareness of some European ancestry remains.
Revised:  To this day, some Catholic villages are still extant in the area where an awareness of some European ancestry remains.
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Original: SieurFrench word standing for Sir de Bruno was a French adventurer and diplomat of the 18th century.
Revised: The Sieur de Bruno was a French adventurer and diplomat of the 18th century.
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Original:  Envoy in Burma [[File:Dupleix.jpg| Sieur de Bruno was sent to Burma by Joseph François Dupleix pictured above.
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Original: South-east Asia: A Short History - Page 148 by Brian Harrison - 1963 Dupleix promised men and munitions and dispatched Sieur de Bruno with the objective of developing French influence in the country.
Revised: South-east Asia: A Short History - Page 148 by Brian Harrison - 1963 Dupleix promised men and munitions and dispatched Bruno with the objective of developing French influence in the country.
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Original: Europe and Burma: A Study of European Relations with Burma- Page 62 by Daniel George Edward Hall - 1945: "Dupleix promised them men and munitions, but before deciding how far to commit himself he sent over his agent, the Sieur de Bruno, to Pegu".
Revised: Europe and Burma: A Study of European Relations with Burma- Page 62 by Daniel George Edward Hall - 1945: "Dupleix promised them men and munitions, but before deciding how far to commit himself he sent over his agent, the Bruno, to Pegu".
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Original: Coupland, p.78-79 Sieur de Bruno reported back that a few hundred French troops would be able to take control of the Irrawaddy Delta, triggering an official request by Dupleix to the French court to obtain the necessary military support.
Revised: Coupland, p.78-79 Bruno reported back that a few hundred French troops would be able to take control of the Irrawaddy Delta, triggering an official request by Dupleix to the French court to obtain the necessary military support.
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Original: Coupland, p.79South-east Asia: A Short History - Page 148 by Brian Harrison - 1963 "Soon after his arrival in 1751 the agent, Sieur de Bruno, reported back to Pondicherry that the Irrawaddy delta could easily be conquered by a small force".
Revised: Coupland, p.79South-east Asia: A Short History - Page 148 by Brian Harrison - 1963 "Soon after his arrival in 1751 the agent, Bruno, reported back to Pondicherry that the Irrawaddy delta could easily be conquered by a small force".
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Original:  Sieur de Bruno obtained a treaty Burma's Foreign Relations: Neutralism in Theory and Practice - Page 14 by Chi Shad Liang - 1990: "In July 1751, Dupleix sent Sieur de Bruno to Burma and negotiated a treaty by which, in return for commercial concessions, the Mons were to receive substancial French aid". and formed an alliance between France and the Mons.
Revised:  Bruno obtained a treaty Burma's Foreign Relations: Neutralism in Theory and Practice - Page 14 by Chi Shad Liang - 1990: "In July 1751, Dupleix sent Sieur de Bruno to Burma and negotiated a treaty by which, in return for commercial concessions, the Mons were to receive substancial French aid". and formed an alliance between France and the Mons.
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Original:  Sieur de Bruno obtained a treaty Burma's Foreign Relations: Neutralism in Theory and Practice - Page 14 by Chi Shad Liang - 1990: "In July 1751, Dupleix sent Sieur de Bruno to Burma and negotiated a treaty by which, in return for commercial concessions, the Mons were to receive substancial French aid". and formed an alliance between France and the Mons.
Revised:  Sieur de Bruno obtained a treaty Burma's Foreign Relations: Neutralism in Theory and Practice - Page 14 by Chi Shad Liang - 1990: "In July 1751, Dupleix sent Bruno to Burma and negotiated a treaty by which, in return for commercial concessions, the Mons were to receive substancial French aid". and formed an alliance between France and the Mons.
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Original: The Mandarin Road to Old Hué: Narratives of Anglo-Vietnamese Diplomacy - Page 64 by Alastair Lamb - 1970: "In 1751 Dupleix sent the Sieur de Bruno to Pegu to initiate an alliance between the French and the Mon Government at Pegu against the Burmans".
Revised: The Mandarin Road to Old Hué: Narratives of Anglo-Vietnamese Diplomacy - Page 64 by Alastair Lamb - 1970: "In 1751 Dupleix sent the Bruno to Pegu to initiate an alliance between the French and the Mon Government at Pegu against the Burmans".
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Original:  The Mons firmly opposed these attempts at British encroachment under the counsel of Sieur de Bruno, who had considerable influence at the Mon court and was especially on excellent terms with the Heir Apparent.
Revised:  The Mons firmly opposed these attempts at British encroachment under the counsel of Bruno, who had considerable influence at the Mon court and was especially on excellent terms with the Heir Apparent.
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Original:  Participation in the Burman-Mon conflict [[File:MyanmarYangon.png| Sieur de Bruno helped the Mons organize the defense of Syriam against the Burmese.
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Original:  In Syriam, Sieur de Bruno was helping the Mons in organizing their defense.
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Original: Coupland, p.78/p.81A History of South-east Asia - Page 382, by Daniel George Edward Hall, 1964: "Moreover, the Mons were aided by a brilliant Frenchman, the Sieur de Bruno, whom Dupleix had sent some years earlier to Pegu as his agent" Sieur de Bruno was insistently requesting more help from Pondicherry.
Revised: Coupland, p.78/p.81A History of South-east Asia - Page 382, by Daniel George Edward Hall, 1964: "Moreover, the Mons were aided by a brilliant Frenchman, the Bruno, whom Dupleix had sent some years earlier to Pegu as his agent" Sieur de Bruno was insistently requesting more help from Pondicherry.
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Original: Coupland, p.78/p.81A History of South-east Asia - Page 382, by Daniel George Edward Hall, 1964: "Moreover, the Mons were aided by a brilliant Frenchman, the Sieur de Bruno, whom Dupleix had sent some years earlier to Pegu as his agent" Sieur de Bruno was insistently requesting more help from Pondicherry.
Revised: Coupland, p.78/p.81A History of South-east Asia - Page 382, by Daniel George Edward Hall, 1964: "Moreover, the Mons were aided by a brilliant Frenchman, the Sieur de Bruno, whom Dupleix had sent some years earlier to Pegu as his agent" Bruno was insistently requesting more help from Pondicherry.
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Original: Coupland, p.82 Sieur de Bruno and the other French with him were captured and tortured.
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Original:  The French captains were killed and the 200 sailors forced to join the Burmese army Sieur de Bruno was roasted to death.
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Original: Fear and Sanctuary By Hazel J. Lang, p.28 The Mons had to retreat, as Alaunpaya first recovered northern Burma, capturing the city of Ava on January 14 , 1754.
Revised: Fear and Sanctuary By Hazel J. Lang, p.28 The Mons had to retreat, as Alaunpaya first recovered northern Burma, capturing the city of Ava on 14 , 1754.
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Original:  The Mons firmly opposed these attempts at British encroachment under the counsel of Bruno, who had considerable influence at the Mon court and was especially on excellent terms with the Heir Apparent.
Revised:  The Mons swiftly rejected the offer after listening to the the counsel of Bruno, who had considerable influence at the Mon court and was especially on excellent terms with the Heir Apparent.
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Original:  Saunders finally decided to occupy Negrais forcibly , occupying the island on 26 April 1753.
Revised:  Saunders finally decided to land at Negrais instead , occupying the island on 26 April 1753.
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Original:  Alaungpaya on the other hand was asking the British for guns and ammunition.
Revised:  Alaungpaya on the other hand , successfully sought British assistance for guns and ammunition.
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Original:  Coupland, p.82 Bruno and the other French with him were captured and tortured.
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Original:  Back in  1980s,  introduced the pop sensation Vital Signs to the mainstream media.
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Original:  Back in  1980s,  introduced the pop sensation Vital Signs to the mainstream media.
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Original:  Mansoor won much criticusm for his work including the Sitara-i-Imtiaz Award from the President of Pakistan in 2008.
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Original:  Mansoor found further critical acclaim for his musical abilities, writing songs for Vital Signs in the 1990s and introduced the band nationwide.
Revised:  Shoaib found further critical acclaim for his musical abilities, writing songs for Vital Signs in the 1990s and introduced the band nationwide.
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Original: The British people, or Britons, are the citizens of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, the British Overseas Territories, and the Crown dependencies.
Revised: The British "people," or Britons, are the citizens of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, the British Overseas Territories, and the Crown dependencies.
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Original: The British "people, " or Britons, are the citizens of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, the British Overseas Territories, and the Crown dependencies.
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Original:  Retrieved 04_11_2014 | region2 = | pop2 = Unbulleted list |class=nowrap | (2015) The British people, or Britons, are the citizens of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, the British Overseas Territories, and the Crown dependencies.
Revised:  Retrieved 04_11_2014 | region2 = | pop2 = The British people, or Britons, are the citizens of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, the British Overseas Territories, and the Crown dependencies.
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Original: British political institutions include the Westminster system, the Commonwealth of Nations and Privy Council of the United Kingdom..
Revised: British political institutions include the Westminster system, and the Privy Council of the United Kingdom..
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Original: There is bi-directional communication and feedback between the HPA axis and  immune system.
Revised: There is bi-directional communication and feedback between the HPA axis and the immune system.
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Original: Early life Greg Urwin was born on 21 August 1946, in Lithgow, New South Wales, Australia, to parents Frank and Verna Urwin.
Revised: Early life Greg Urwin was born in Lithgow, New South Wales, Australia, to parents Frank and Verna Urwin.
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Original: Pacific Islands Forum Pacific Islands Forum Urwin's skill as a diplomat and his handling of the Solomon Islands tension earned him a reputation of having an awareness of the sensibilities of Pacific Island leaders and local culture.
Revised: Pacific Islands Forum Urwin's skill as a diplomat and his handling of the Solomon Islands tension earned him a reputation of having an awareness of the sensibilities of Pacific Island leaders and local culture.
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Original:  22x20px|border|Pacific Islands Forum Pacific Islands Forum – Acting Secretary General Feleti Teo, who succeeded Urwin in May 2008, praised Urwin as the "architect of the Pacific Plan."
Revised:  Pacific Islands Forum – Acting Secretary General Feleti Teo, who succeeded Urwin in May 2008, praised Urwin as the "architect of the Pacific Plan."
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Original:  Sang said, "French Polynesia does not forget either that it is also under Greg Urwin's mandate and under his determining impetus, that the Forum has opened up to the French Pacific entities by granting them the associate member status (for New Caledonia and French Polynesia) and the observer status for Wallis and Futuna." RAMSI, 14 August 2008.
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Original:  Sang said, "French Polynesia does not forget either that it is also under Greg Urwin's mandate and under his determining impetus, that the Forum has opened up to the French Pacific entities by granting them the associate member status (for New Caledonia and French Polynesia) and the observer status for Wallis and Futuna." RAMSI, 14 August 2008.
Revised:  Sang said, "French Polynesia does not forget either that it is also under Greg Urwin's mandate and under his determining impetus, that the Forum has opened up to the French Pacific entities by granting them the associate member status (for New Caledonia and French Polynesia) and the observer status for Wallis and Futuna." 
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Original: Shaima Rezayee(  1981 – May 18, 2005) was a female TV presenter on the Afghan music television channel, Tolo TV.
Revised: Shaima Rezayee( )( 1981 – May 18, 2005) was a female TV presenter on the Afghan music television channel, Tolo TV.
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Original: Shaima Rezayee () (1981 – May 18, 2005) was a female TV presenter on the Afghan music television channel, Tolo TV.
Revised: Shaima Rezayee () (1981 – May 18, 2005) was a TV presenter on the Afghan music television channel, Tolo TV.
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Original:  Previously, there has always been only one TV station in Kabul which was run and controlled by the government .
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hazara people Fariba Rezayee References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Hazara people Category:Hazara artists Category:1981 births Category:2005 deaths Category:Afghan murder victims Category:Deaths by firearm in Afghanistan Category:People murdered in Afghanistan Category:Afghan television presente
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hazara people Fariba Rezayee References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Hazara people Category:Hazara artists Category:1981 births Category:2005 deaths Category:Afghan murder victims Category:Deaths by firearm in Afghanistan Category:People murdered in Afghanistan Category:Afghan television presente
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hazara people Fariba Rezayee References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Hazara people Category:Hazara artists Category:1981 births Category:2005 deaths Category:Afghan murder victims Category:Deaths by firearm in Afghanistan Category:People murdered in Afghanistan Category:Afghan television presente
Revised:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hazara people Fariba Rezayee %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Hazara people Category:Hazara artists Category:1981 births Category:2005 deaths Category:Afghan murder victims Category:Deaths by firearm in Afghanistan Category:People murdered in Afghanistan Category:Afghan television presente
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Original: Benjamin Hedericus (1675–1748) is most notable as author of a Greek Lexicon , which was widely used in the Roman Catholic Church in Europe.
Revised: Benjamin Hedericus (1675–1748) is most notable as author of a Greek lexicon , which was widely used in the Roman Catholic Church in Europe.
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Original:  He was also the author of: Notitia Auctorum Antiqua et Media Progymnasmata Linguae Graecae Progymnasmata Linguae Latinae Fasti Consulares Romani Reales Schul-Lexicon Lexicon Manuale Graecum - edited and expanded by Johann August Ernesti in 1767 Grundliches Mythologisches Lexicon Lexicon Manuale Latino-Germanicum  There was another Dr.
Revised:  He was authored the following: Notitia Auctorum Antiqua et Media Progymnasmata Linguae Graecae Progymnasmata Linguae Latinae Fasti Consulares Romani Reales Schul-Lexicon Lexicon Manuale Graecum - edited and expanded by Johann August Ernesti in 1767 Grundliches Mythologisches Lexicon Lexicon Manuale Latino-Germanicum There was another Dr.
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Original:  He was also the author of: Notitia Auctorum Antiqua et Media Progymnasmata Linguae Graecae Progymnasmata Linguae Latinae Fasti Consulares Romani Reales Schul-Lexicon Lexicon Manuale Graecum - edited and expanded by Johann August Ernesti in 1767 Grundliches Mythologisches Lexicon Lexicon Manuale Latino-Germanicum  There was another Dr.
Revised:  He was also the author of: Notitia Auctorum Antiqua et Media Progymnasmata Linguae Graecae Progymnasmata Linguae Latinae Fasti Consulares Romani Reales Schul-Lexicon Lexicon Manuale Graecum - edited and expanded by Johann August Ernesti in 1767 Grundliches Mythologisches Lexicon Lexicon Manuale Latino-Germanicum There was another similarly named individual, Dr
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Original: Benjamin Hedericus (12 December 1675  ]] – 18 July 1748)  is most notable as  author of a Greek lexicon , which was widely used in the Roman Catholic Church in Europe.
Revised: Benjamin Hedericus (12 December 1675 ]] – 18 July 1748) is most notable as the author of a Greek lexicon , which was widely used in the Roman Catholic Church in Europe.
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Original: Benjamin Hedericus (12 December 1675  ]] – 18 July 1748)  is most notable as  author of a Greek lexicon , which was widely used in the Roman Catholic Church in Europe.
Revised: Benjamin Hedericus (12 December 1675 ]] – 18 July 1748) is most notable as author of a Greek lexicon that was widely used in the Roman Catholic Church in Europe.
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