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Original: J. R. Kealoha (died March 5, 1877) was an American Union Army soldier of Native Hawaiian descent . Considered one of the "Hawaiʻi Sons of the Civil War", he was among a group of more than one hundred documented Native Hawaiian and Hawaiʻi-born combatants who fought in the American Civil War while the Kingdom of Hawaiʻi was still an independent nation.
Revised: J. R. Kealoha (died March 5, 1877) was an American Union Army soldier of Native Hawaiian descent . Considered one of the "Hawaiʻi Sons of the Civil War", he was among a group of more than one hundred documented Native Hawaiian and Hawaiʻi-born combatants who fought in the American Civil War while the Kingdom of Hawaiʻi was an independent nation.
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Original:  They were often registered as kanakas, the 19th-century term for Hawaiians and Pacific Islanders, with the "Sandwich Islands" (Hawaiʻi) noted as their place of origin.
Revised:  They often were registered as kanakas, the 19th-century term for Hawaiians and Pacific Islanders, with the "Sandwich Islands" (Hawaiʻi) noted as their place of origin.
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Original:  They were often registered as kanakas, the 19th-century term for Hawaiians and Pacific Islanders, with the "Sandwich Islands" (Hawaiʻi) noted as their place of origin.
Revised:  They were often registered as kanakas, the nineteenth-century term for Hawaiians and Pacific Islanders, with the "Sandwich Islands" (Hawaiʻi) noted as their place of origin.
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Original:  [[File:Samuel C. Armstrong on horseback (PP-67-5-036).jpg|thumbnail|Samuel Chapman Armstrong was one of the highest-ranking Hawaiian combatants in the Civil War and was in command of the 9th USCT and 8th USCT . ]] From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg Campaign, better known as the Siege of Petersburg.
Revised:  [[File:Samuel C. Armstrong on horseback (PP-67-5-036).jpg|thumbnail|Samuel Chapman Armstrong , one of the highest-ranking Hawaiian combatants in the Civil War and was in command of the 9th USCT and 8th USCT . ]] From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg Campaign, better known as the Siege of Petersburg.
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Original:  [[File:Samuel C. Armstrong on horseback (PP-67-5-036).jpg|thumbnail|Samuel Chapman Armstrong was one of the highest-ranking Hawaiian combatants in the Civil War and was in command of the 9th USCT and 8th USCT . ]] From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg Campaign, better known as the Siege of Petersburg.
Revised:  [[File:Samuel C. Armstrong on horseback (PP-67-5-036).jpg|thumbnail|Samuel Chapman Armstrong was one of the highest-ranking Hawaiian combatants in the Civil War and in command of the 9th USCT and 8th USCT . ]] From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg Campaign, better known as the Siege of Petersburg.
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Original:  [[File:Samuel C. Armstrong on horseback (PP-67-5-036).jpg|thumbnail|Samuel Chapman Armstrong was one of the highest-ranking Hawaiian combatants in the Civil War and was in command of the 9th USCT and 8th USCT . ]] From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg Campaign, better known as the Siege of Petersburg.
Revised:  [[File:Samuel C. Armstrong on horseback (PP-67-5-036).jpg|thumbnail|Samuel Chapman Armstrong was one of the highest-ranking Hawaiian combatants in the Civil War and was in command of the 9th USCT and 8th USCT , was the source of information about the presence of Kealoha among the soldiers participating in the war ]] From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg Campaign, better known as the Siege of Petersburg.
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Original:  Armstrong wrote of the encounter in a letter home that was later published in the Hawaiian missionary newspaper The Friend in 1865: Yesterday, as my orderly was holding my horse, I asked him where he was from.
Revised:  Armstrong wrote of the encounter in a letter home that later, was published in the Hawaiian missionary newspaper The Friend in 1865: Yesterday, as my orderly was holding my horse, I asked him where he was from.
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Original:  Adorned with sacred maile lei, a koa branch  and other offerings after the dedication ceremony]]
Revised:  Adorned with sacred maile lei, a koa branch , and other offerings after the dedication ceremony]]
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Original:  Giving the reason for the significance of Kealoha's service, Manning stated: The group petitioned the United States Department of Veterans Affairs for a marker for Kealoha  but the Department denied the request because there was no next of kin to approve the request.
Revised:  Giving the reason for the significance of Kealoha's service, Manning stated: The group petitioned the United States Department of Veterans Affairs for a marker for Kealoha , but the Department denied the request because there was no next of kin to approve the request.
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Original:  After the request's denial , Honor Life Memorials, a local monument maker, donated a granite marker for Kealoha.
Revised:  After the denial of the request , Honor Life Memorials, a local monument maker, donated a granite marker for Kealoha.
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Original:  Hawaiian minister Kahu Silva presided over the dedication ceremony, and in accordance with traditional Hawaiian customs, the consecrated marker was adorned with a sacred maile lei and a koa branch, representing "Kealoha's noble qualities of bravery, courage  and valor."
Revised:  Hawaiian minister Kahu Silva presided over the dedication ceremony, and in accordance with traditional Hawaiian customs, the consecrated marker was adorned with a sacred maile lei and a koa branch, representing "Kealoha's noble qualities of bravery, courage , and valor."
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Original:  The exact number remains unclear because of the lack of records.
Revised:  The exact number remains uncertain because of the lack of records.
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Original:  Considered one of the "Hawaiʻi Sons of the Civil War", he was among a group of more than one hundred documented Native Hawaiian and Hawaiʻi-born combatants who fought in the American Civil War while the Kingdom of Hawaiʻi was an independent nation.
Revised:  Considered one of the "Hawaiʻi sons of the Civil War", he was among a group of more than one hundred documented Native Hawaiian and Hawaiʻi-born combatants who fought in the American Civil War while the Kingdom of Hawaiʻi was an independent nation.
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Original:  Participating in the Siege of Petersburg, he and another Hawaiian soldier met the Hawaiʻi-born Colonel Samuel Chapman Armstrong, who recorded their encounter in a letter home.
Revised:  Participating in the siege of Petersburg, he and another Hawaiian soldier met the Hawaiʻi-born Colonel Samuel Chapman Armstrong, who recorded their encounter in a letter home.
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Original:  In 2010, these "Hawaiʻi Sons of the Civil War" were commemorated with a bronze plaque erected along the memorial pathway at the National Memorial Cemetery of the Pacific in Honolulu.
Revised:  In 2010, these "Hawaiʻi sons of the Civil War" were commemorated with a bronze plaque erected along the memorial pathway at the National Memorial Cemetery of the Pacific in Honolulu.
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Original:  From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg Campaign , better known as the Siege of Petersburg.
Revised:  From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg campaign , better known as the Siege of Petersburg.
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Original:  From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg Campaign , better known as the Siege of Petersburg.
Revised:  From October 1864 to April 1865, Kealoha fought in the Richmond–Petersburg Campaign , better known as the siege of Petersburg.
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Original:  Kealoha survived months of trench warfare during the Richmond-Petersburg Campaign and fought with the 41st USCT at the Battle of Appomattox Court House.
Revised:  Kealoha survived months of trench warfare during the Richmond–Petersburg campaign and fought with the 41st USCT at the Battle of Appomattox Court House.
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Original:  Other Hawaiian veterans of the Civil War are honored in Honolulu's National Memorial Cemetery of the Pacific with a bronze memorial plaque that was erected in 2010 in recognition of the "Hawaiʻi Sons of the Civil War", the more than one hundred documented Hawaiians who served with the Union and the Confederacy.
Revised:  Other Hawaiian veterans of the Civil War are honored in Honolulu's National Memorial Cemetery of the Pacific with a bronze memorial plaque that was erected in 2010 in recognition of the "Hawaiʻi sons of the Civil War", the more than one hundred documented Hawaiians who served with the Union and the Confederacy.
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Original:  The term is often used to denote the essence of humankind , or what it 'means' to be human.
Revised:  The term is often used to denote the essence of mankind , or what it 'means' to be human.
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Original:  The term is often used to denote the essence of mankind , or what it 'means' to be human.
Revised:  The term is often used to denote the essence of humankind , or what it 'means' to be human.
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Original: Human nature is a concept that denotes the fundamental dispositions and characteristics—including ways of thinking, feeling, and acting—that humans are said to have naturally.
Revised: Lund is a concept that denotes the fundamental dispositions and characteristics—including ways of thinking, feeling, and acting—that humans are said to have naturally.
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Original: Gay writers Category:Cree people Category:Writers from Alberta Category:Writers from British Columbia Category:Ryerson University alumni Category:Living people Category:First Nations screenwriters Category:21st-century Canadian novelists Category:Canadian male novelists Category:Canadian writers of young adult literature Category:First Nations novelists Category:LGBT novelists Category:Film directors from British Columbia Category:21st-century First Nations write
Revised: Gay writers Category:Cree people Category:Writers from Alberta Category:Writers from British Columbia Category:Ryerson University alumni Category:Living people Category:First Nations screenwriters Category:21st-century Canadian novelists Category:Canadian male novelists Category:Canadian writers of young adult literature Category:First Nations novelists Category:LGBT novelists Category:Film directors from British Columbia Category:21st-century First Nations writers Category:Canadian male screenwriters Category:21st-century Canadian screenwrite
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Original:   He subsequently made the short films A Small Thing, Wave a Red Flag and Liar, wrote an episode of the television series Cashing In, and was a writer and story editor on the television series Mohawk Girls.
Revised:  Career He subsequently made the short films A Small Thing, Wave a Red Flag and Liar, wrote an episode of the television series Cashing In, and was a writer and story editor on the television series Mohawk Girls.
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Original: 21st-century Canadian novelists Category:Canadian male novelists Category:Canadian writers of young adult literature Category:First Nations novelists Category:Place of birth missing (living people) Category:LGBT novelists Category:Film directors from British Columbia Category:21st-century First Nations writers Category:Canadian male screenwriters Category:21st-century Canadian screenwriters Category:Canadian male television writers Category:Year of birth missing (living peopl
Revised: 21st-century Canadian novelists Category:Canadian male novelists Category:Canadian writers of young adult literature Category:First Nations novelists Category:Place of birth missing (living people) Category:LGBT novelists Category:Film directors from British Columbia Category:21st-century First Nations writers Category:Canadian male screenwriters Category:21st-century Canadian screenwriters Category:Canadian male television writers Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:21st-century LGBT peop
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Original: Her films with Jyotish Banerjee included Joydev (1926), Rishir Prem (1931), Jorebarat (1931), Vishnumaya (1932), Kantahaar (1935) and Manomoyee Girls School (1935).
Revised: Her films with Jyotish Bannerjee included Joydev (1926), Rishir Prem (1931), Jorebarat (1931), Vishnumaya (1932), Kantahaar (1935) and Manomoyee Girls School (1935).
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Original: Leela Debaki Bose Actor 1946Arabian Nights Niren Lahiri Actor 1947Chandrasekhar Debaki Bose Actor 1947Faisla Apurba Kumar Mitra Actor 1948Bankalekha Chitta Bose Actor 1948Anirban Soumyen Mukherjee Actor 1949Ananya Sabyasachi Actor 1949Anuradha Pranab Roy Actor 1950Mej Didi Ajay Kar Actor 1952Darpachurna Actor 1954Nababidhan Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1955DebatraHaridas Bhattacharya Actor 1956Asha Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1959Indranath Srikanta-O-Annadadidi Haridas Bhattacharya Actor
Revised: Leela Debaki Bose Actor 1946Arabian Nights Niren Lahiri Actor 1947Chandrasekhar Debaki Bose Actor 1947Faisla Apurba Kumar Mitra Actor 1948Bankalekha Chitta Bose Actor 1948Anirban Soumyen Mukherjee Actor 1949Ananya Sabyasachi Actor 1949Anuradha Pranab Roy Actor 1950Mej Didi Ajay Kar Actor 1952Darpachurna Actor 1954Nababidhan Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1955DebatraHaridas Bhattacharya Actor 1956Asha Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1959Indranath Srikanta O Annadadidi Haridas Bhattacharya Actor
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Original:  A postage stamp, bearing Kanan's likeness, was released to honour her by India ’ s Minister of State for Communication and Information Technology in February 2011.
Revised:  A postage stamp, bearing Kanan's likeness, was released to honour her by India ' s Minister of State for Communication and Information Technology in February 2011.
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Original: 1|Devi on a 2011 stamp of India 1942-Won BFJA Award-Best Actress Award for Parichaya 1943-Won BFJA Award-Best Actress Award for Shesh Uttar She was awarded the Padma Shree Award in 1968.
Revised: 1|Devi on a 2011 stamp of India 1942-Won BFJA Award-Best Actress Award for Parichaya 1943-Won BFJA Award-Best Actress Award for Shesh Uttar She was awarded the Padma Shri Award in 1968.
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Original: Biography Kanan was born on 22 April 1916 in Howrah, West Bengal.
Revised: Bio graphy Kanan was born on 22 April 1916 in Howrah, West Bengal.
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Original: Leela Debaki Bose Actor 1946Arabian Nights Niren Lahiri Actor 1947Chandrasekhar Debaki Bose Actor 1947Faisla Apurba Kumar Mitra Actor 1948Bankalekha Chitta Bose Actor 1948Anirban Soumyen Mukherjee Actor 1949Ananya Sabyasachi Actor 1949Anuradha Pranab Roy Actor 1950Mej Didi Ajay Kar Actor 1952Darpachurna Actor 1954Nababidhan Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1955DebatraHaridas Bhattacharya Actor 1956Asha Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1959Indranath Srikanta O Annadadidi Haridas Bhattacharya Actor   
Revised: Leela Debaki Bose Actor 1946Arabian Nights Niren Lahiri Actor 1947Chandrasekhar Debaki Bose Actor 1947Faisla Apurba Kumar Mitra Actor 1948Bankalekha Chitta Bose Actor 1948Anirban Soumyen Mukherjee Actor 1949Ananya Sabyasachi Actor 1949Anuradha Pranab Roy Actor 1950Mej Didi Ajay Kar Actor 1952Darpachurna Actor 1954Nababidhan Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1955DebatraHaridas Bhattacharya Actor 1956Asha Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1959Indranath Srikanta O Annadadidi Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1965Rajlakshmi O Srikanta Indranath Srikanta O Annadadid 
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Original: Leela Debaki Bose Actor 1946Arabian Nights Niren Lahiri Actor 1947Chandrasekhar Debaki Bose Actor 1947Faisla Apurba Kumar Mitra Actor 1948Bankalekha Chitta Bose Actor 1948Anirban Soumyen Mukherjee Actor 1949Ananya Sabyasachi Actor 1949Anuradha Pranab Roy Actor 1950Mej Didi Ajay Kar Actor 1952Darpachurna Actor 1954Nababidhan Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1955DebatraHaridas Bhattacharya Actor 1956Asha Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1959Indranath Srikanta O Annadadidi Haridas Bhattacharya Actor   
Revised: Leela Debaki Bose Actor 1946Arabian Nights Niren Lahiri Actor 1947Chandrasekhar Debaki Bose Actor 1947Faisla Apurba Kumar Mitra Actor 1948Bankalekha Chitta Bose Actor 1948Anirban Soumyen Mukherjee Actor 1949Ananya Sabyasachi Actor 1949Anuradha Pranab Roy Actor 1950Mej Didi Ajay Kar Actor 1952Darpachurna Actor 1954Nababidhan Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1955DebatraHaridas Bhattacharya Actor 1956Asha Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1959Indranath Srikanta O Annadadidi Haridas Bhattacharya Actor Abhay O SrikantaiHaridas Bhattacharya Haridas Bhattacharya 
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Original: Leela Debaki Bose Actor 1946Arabian Nights Niren Lahiri Actor 1947Chandrasekhar Debaki Bose Actor 1947Faisla Apurba Kumar Mitra Actor 1948Bankalekha Chitta Bose Actor 1948Anirban Soumyen Mukherjee Actor 1949Ananya Sabyasachi Actor 1949Anuradha Pranab Roy Actor 1950Mej Didi Ajay Kar Actor 1952Darpachurna Actor 1954Nababidhan Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1955DebatraHaridas Bhattacharya Actor 1956Asha Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1959Indranath Srikanta O Annadadidi Haridas Bhattacharya Actor   
Revised: Leela Debaki Bose Actor 1946Arabian Nights Niren Lahiri Actor 1947Chandrasekhar Debaki Bose Actor 1947Faisla Apurba Kumar Mitra Actor 1948Bankalekha Chitta Bose Actor 1948Anirban Soumyen Mukherjee Actor 1949Ananya Sabyasachi Actor 1949Anuradha Pranab Roy Actor 1950Mej Didi Ajay Kar Actor 1952Darpachurna Actor 1954Nababidhan Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1955DebatraHaridas Bhattacharya Actor 1956Asha Haridas Bhattacharya Actor 1959Indranath Srikanta O Annadadidi Haridas Bhattacharya Actor Haridas BhattacharyaActor
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Original:  Life is Good Corporate Logo, 2011-2015 
Revised:  Life is Good Corporate Logo, 2011-2015 .
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Original:  Life is Good Corporate Logo, 2011-2015 .
Revised:  Life is Good Corporate Logo, 2011-2015 
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Original:  At a street fair in Cambridge, Massachusetts, the shirts sold out in less than an URL The brothers began to sell T-shirts and hats featuring Jake in local stores.
Revised:  At a street fair in Cambridge, Massachusetts, the shirts sold out in less than an hour. The brothers began to sell T-shirts and hats featuring Jake in local stores.
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Original:  from Arabic اَلسُّمُوت as-sumūt, 'the directions', the plural form of the Arabic noun السَّمْت as-samt, meaning 'the direction') is an angular measurement in a spherical coordinate system.
Revised:  from )The singular form of the Arabic noun السَّمْت as-samt, meaning 'the direction') is an angular measurement in a spherical coordinate system.
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Original:  from Arabic اَلسُّمُوت as-sumūt, 'the directions', the plural form of the Arabic noun السَّمْت as-samt, meaning 'the direction') is an angular measurement in a spherical coordinate system.
Revised:  from Arabic اَلسُّمُوت as-sumūt, 'the directions', the plural form of the noun is . is an angular measurement in a spherical coordinate system.
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Original:  The star is the point of interest, the reference plane is the local area (e.g. a circular area  5 km in radius at sea level) around an observer on Earth's surface, and the reference vector points to true north.
Revised:  The star is the point of interest, the reference plane is the local area (e.g. a circular area with a 5 km in radius at sea level) around an observer on Earth's surface, and the reference vector points to true north.
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Original:  The star is the point of interest, the reference plane is the local area (e.g. a circular area  5 km in radius at sea level) around an observer on Earth's surface, and the reference vector points to true north.
Revised:  The star is the point of interest, the reference plane is the local area (e.g. a circular area 5 km radius at sea level) around an observer on Earth's surface, and the reference vector points to true north.
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Original: In navigation [[File:True North Mount Allen.fw.png|Azimuth Marker, Mount Allen (Sandstone Peak), Southern California, USA .]] In land navigation, azimuth is usually denoted alpha, α, and defined as a horizontal angle measured clockwise from a north base line or meridian.
Revised: In navigation [[File:True North Mount Allen.fw.png|Azimuth Marker, Mount Allen (Sandstone Peak), Southern California, US .]] In land navigation, azimuth is usually denoted alpha, α, and defined as a horizontal angle measured clockwise from a north base line or meridian.
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Original:  Right ascension If, instead of measuring from and along the horizon, the angles are measured from and along the celestial equator, the angles are called right ascension if referenced to the Vernal Equinox, or hour angle if referenced to the celestial meridian . Horizontal coordinate In the horizontal coordinate system, used in celestial navigation and satellite dish installation, azimuth is one of the two coordinates.
Revised:  Right ascension If, instead of measuring from and along the horizon, the angles are measured from and along the celestial equator, the angles are called right ascension if referenced to the Vernal Equinox, or hour angle if referenced to the celestial meridian Horizontal coordinate In the horizontal coordinate system, used in celestial navigation and satellite dish installation, azimuth is one of the two coordinates.
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Original: [[File:Balboamurder.jpg|  Balboa setting his dogs upon Indian practitioners of homosexuality (1594)  engraving from the New York Public Library.
Revised: [[File:Balboamurder.jpg| Balboa setting his dogs upon Indian practitioners of homosexuality (1594) ; engraving from the New York Public Library.
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Original:  He was not successful in this enterprise, however, and ended up in debt .
Revised:  He was not successful in this enterprise, and ended up in debt .
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Original:  Ojeda, together with seventy men, had founded the settlement of San Sebastián de Urabá in Nueva Andalucía, on the location where the city of Cartagena de Indias would later be built.
Revised:  Ojeda, together with 70 men, had founded the settlement of San Sebastián de Urabá in Nueva Andalucía, on the location where the city of Cartagena de Indias would later be built.
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Original:  Ojeda asked Pizarro to leave some men in the settlement for fifty days and, if no help arrived at the end of that time, to use all possible means to get back to Hispaniola.
Revised:  Ojeda asked Pizarro to leave some men in the settlement for 50 days and, if no help arrived at the end of that time, to use all possible means to get back to Hispaniola.
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Original:  After the fifty days had passed, Pizarro started preparations for the return to Hispaniola, when Enciso's ship arrived.
Revised:  After the 50 days had passed, Pizarro started preparations for the return to Hispaniola, when Enciso's ship arrived.
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Original:  By contrast Fernández de Enciso was not well liked by the men : many disapproved of his order to return to San Sebastián, especially after discovering, once they had arrived, that the settlement had been completely destroyed and that the natives were already waiting for them, leading to a series of relentless attacks.
Revised:  By contrast Fernández de Enciso was not well liked by the men . Many disapproved of his order to return to San Sebastián, especially after discovering, once they had arrived, that the settlement had been completely destroyed and that the natives were already waiting for them, leading to a series of relentless attacks.
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Original:  The Spanish, fearful of the large number of enemy combatants, made a vow to the Virgen de la Antigua, venerated in Seville, that they would name a settlement in the region after her should they prevail.
Revised:  The Spanish, fearing the large number of enemy combatants, made a vow to the Virgen de la Antigua, venerated in Seville, that they would name a settlement in the region after her should they prevail.
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