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Original: Urinary sodium Because the hypothalamus/osmoreceptor system ordinarily works well to cause drinking or urination to restore the body's sodium concentrations to normal, this system can be used in medical treatment to regulate the body's total fluid content, by first controlling the body's sodium content.
Revised: Urinary sodium Because the hypothalamus/osmoreceptor system ordinarily works well to cause drinking or baymax to restore the body's sodium concentrations to normal, this system can be used in medical treatment to regulate the body's total fluid content, by first controlling the body's sodium content.
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Original:  Calcium ion (Ca2+) also tastes salty and sometimes bitter to some people but, like potassium, can trigger other tastes.
Revised:  The calcium ion (Ca2+) also tastes salty and sometimes bitter to some people but, like potassium, can trigger other tastes.
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Original:  Receptors for the pure salty taste respond best to sodium , otherwise only to a few other small monovalent cations (Li+, NH4+ , and somewhat to K+).
Revised:  Receptors for the pure salty taste respond best to sodium ; otherwise, the receptors respond only to a few other small monovalent cations (Li+, NH4+ , and somewhat to K+).
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Original:  Receptors for the pure salty taste respond best to sodium , otherwise only to a few other small monovalent cations (Li+, NH4+ , and somewhat to K+).
Revised:  Receptors for the pure salty taste respond best to sodium , otherwise only to a few other small monovalent cations (Li+, NH4+ and somewhat to K+).
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Original: Some potent neurotoxins, such as batrachotoxin, increase the sodium ion permeability of the cell membranes in nerves and muscles, causing a massive and irreversible depolarization of the membranes , with potentially fatal consequences.
Revised: Some potent neurotoxins, such as batrachotoxin, increase the sodium ion permeability of the cell membranes in nerves and muscles, causing a massive and irreversible depolarization of the membranes with potentially fatal consequences.
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Original:  However, drugs with smaller effects on sodium ion motion in nerves may have diverse pharmacological effects which range from anti-depressant to anti-seizure actions.
Revised:  However, drugs with smaller effects on sodium ion motion in nerves may have diverse pharmacological effects that range from anti-depressant to anti-seizure actions.
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Original: Washington at Princeton by Charles Wilson Peale (1779) George Washington, who served as commander-in-chief of the Continental Army during the American Revolutionary War and later served as the first President of the United States, was noted for wearing a blue ribbed sash, similar to that of the British Order of the Garter, during parts of the war, but gave up the sash as "unrepublican" and "pretentious for all but the highest-ranking aristocracy," according to historians.
Revised: Washington at Princeton by Charles Wilson Peale (1779) George Washington, who served as commander-in-chief of the Continental Army during the American Revolutionary War and later served as the first President of the United States, was noted for wearing a blue ribbed sash, similar to that of the British Order of the Garter, early in the war, but gave up the sash as "unrepublican" and "pretentious for all but the highest-ranking aristocracy," according to historians.
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Original: Career He authored more than fifty works, including poems, essays, Drama and fiction.
Revised: Career He authored more than fifty works, including poems, essays, drama and fiction.
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Original:  Aganpankhi (1962), Madhav Kyayn Nathi (1970), Krishna ane Manav Sambandho (1982), Mukhvato, Anagat, Hayati (1978), Sang-Asang, Lohi no Rang Lal (1981), Gandhi Ni Kavad (1984) and many more titles to his credit .
Revised:  Aganpankhi (1962), Madhav Kyayn Nathi (1970), Krishna ane Manav Sambandho (1982), Mukhvato, Anagat, Hayati (1978), Sang-Asang, Lohi no Rang Lal (1981), Gandhi Ni Kavad (1984) are his some works .
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Original:  Started journalism with Janashaktiin  1951 till 1962.
Revised:  Journalism He was a journalist by profession. 1951 till 1962.
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Original:  Started journalism with Janashaktiin  1951 till 1962.
Revised:  Started journalism with Janashaktiin 1951 to 1962.
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Original:  He joined Bhavan's as an editor of 'Samarpan' gujarati monthly digest.
Revised:  He joined Bhavan's as an editor of Samarpan, Gujarati monthly digest.
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Original:  In 1968  joined USIS and continued till 1973.
Revised:  In 1968 , he joined USIS and continued till 1973.
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Original:  In 1973  he joined Janashakti -Gujarati daily newspaper as an Editor.
Revised:  In 1973 , he joined Janashakti -Gujarati daily newspaper as an Editor.
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Original:  After Janashakti he Joined Janmabhoomi group of news papers as an Editor in Chief for Janmabhoomo-Daily evening News Paper, Pravasi-Daily Morning Newspaper and "Janambhoomi -Pravasi" Weekly morning News paper . Before embarking on daily journalism in 1951, Harindrabhai worked with Chitrapat- film magazine.
Revised:  After Janashakti , he joined Janmabhoomi Group of Newspapers as an Editor in Chief for Janmabhoomo-Daily evening News Paper, Pravasi-Daily Morning Newspaper and "Janambhoomi -Pravasi" Weekly morning News paper . Before embarking on daily journalism in 1951, Harindrabhai worked with Chitrapat- film magazine.
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Original:  After Janashakti he Joined Janmabhoomi group of news papers as an Editor in Chief for Janmabhoomo-Daily evening News Paper, Pravasi-Daily Morning Newspaper and "Janambhoomi -Pravasi" Weekly morning News paper . Before embarking on daily journalism in 1951, Harindrabhai worked with Chitrapat- film magazine.
Revised:  After Janashakti he Joined Janmabhoomi group of news papers as an Editor in Chief for Janmabhoomi, an evening daily and Pravasi, a morning daily and Janambhoomi-Pravasi, a weekly . Before embarking on daily journalism in 1951, Harindrabhai worked with Chitrapat- film magazine.
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Original:  After Janashakti he Joined Janmabhoomi group of news papers as an Editor in Chief for Janmabhoomo-Daily evening News Paper, Pravasi-Daily Morning Newspaper and "Janambhoomi -Pravasi" Weekly morning News paper . Before embarking on daily journalism in 1951, Harindrabhai worked with Chitrapat- film magazine.
Revised:  After Janashakti he Joined Janmabhoomi group of news papers as an Editor in Chief for Janmabhoomo-Daily evening News Paper, Pravasi-Daily Morning Newspaper and "Janambhoomi -Pravasi" Weekly morning News paper . Before embarking on daily journalism in 1951, Harindrabhai worked with Chitrapat, a film magazine.
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Original:  And during his years with Chitrapat  he came into association with personalities like Shyam, Suraiya, Guru Dutt, Mehbub Khan, Motilal, Mohamad Rafi, Ramanand 'Sagar' etc.
Revised:  And during his years with Chitrapat , he came into association with personalities like Shyam, Suraiya, Guru Dutt, Mehbub Khan, Motilal, Mohamad Rafi, Ramanand 'Sagar' etc.
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Original:  He also received the Ranjitram Suvarna Chandrak in 1982, the Kabir Award (from the Madhya Pradesh Government), the Gujarati Sahitya Parishad award and the Goenka award for Journalism   .
Revised:  He also received the Ranjitram Suvarna Chandrak in 1982, the Kabir Award (from the Madhya Pradesh Government), the Gujarati Sahitya Parishad award and the Goenka award for Journalism . .
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Original:  After Janashakti, he joined Janmabhoomi Group of Newspapers as an Editor in Chief for 'Janmabhoomi', an evening daily and 'Pravasi', a morning daily and 'Janambhoomi-Pravasi ''' , a weekly.
Revised:  After Janashakti, he joined Janmabhoomi Group of Newspapers as an Editor in Chief for 'Janmabhoomi', an evening daily and 'Pravasi', a morning daily and 'Janambhoomi-Pravasi , a weekly.
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Original:  And during his years with Chitrapat, he came into association with personalities like Shyam, Suraiya, Guru Dutt, Mehbub Khan, Motilal, Mohamad Rafi, Ramanand 'Sagar ' etc.
Revised:  And during those years with Chitrapat, he came into association with personalities like Shyam, Suraiya, Guru Dutt, Mehbub Khan, Motilal, Mohamad Rafi, Ramanand 'Sagar ' etc.
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Original:  And during his years with Chitrapat, he came into association with personalities like Shyam, Suraiya, Guru Dutt, Mehbub Khan, Motilal, Mohamad Rafi, Ramanand 'Sagar ' etc.
Revised:  And during his years with Chitrapat, he came into association with personalities like Shyam, Suraiya, Guru Dutt, Mehbub Khan, Motilal, Mohammad Rafi, Ramanand 'Sagar ' etc.
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Original:  And during his years with Chitrapat, he came into association with personalities like Shyam, Suraiya, Guru Dutt, Mehbub Khan, Motilal, Mohamad Rafi, Ramanand 'Sagar ' etc.
Revised:  And during his years with Chitrapat, he came into association with personalities like Shyam, Suraiya, Guru Dutt, Mehbub Khan, Motilal, Mohamad Rafi, Ramanand Sagar etc.
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Original:  Recognition He received the Sahitya Akademi Award in 1978 for his poetry collection Hayati '' . He also received the Ranjitram Suvarna Chandrak in 1982, the Kabir Award (from the Madhya Pradesh Government), the Gujarati Sahitya Parishad award and the Goenka award for Journalism.
Revised:  Recognition He received the Sahitya Akademi Award in 1978 for his poetry collection Hayati . He also received the Ranjitram Suvarna Chandrak in 1982, the Kabir Award (from the Madhya Pradesh Government), the Gujarati Sahitya Parishad award and the Goenka award for Journalism.
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Original:  He was educated at the Shamaldas Gandhi College, Bhavnagar and later the University of Bombay.
Revised:  He was educated at the Shamaldas Gandhi College, Bhavnagar and later University of Bombay.
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Original:  He was educated at the Shamaldas Mehta College, Bhavnagar and later University of Bombay.
Revised:  He was educated at the Samaldas College, Bhavnagar and later University of Bombay.
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Original: Aganpankhi (1962), Madhav Kyayn Nathi (1970), Krishna ane Manav Sambandho (1982), Mukhvato, Anagat, Hayati (1978), Sang-Asang, Lohi no Rang Lal (1981), Gandhi Ni Kavad (1984) are his some works.
Revised: Aganpankhi (1962), Madhav Kyayn Nathi (1970), Krishna ane Manav Sambandho (1982), Mukhvato, Anagat, Hayati (1978), Sang-Asang, Lohi no Rang Lal (1981), Gandhi Ni Kavad (1984) are some of his works.
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Original:  His son was the cricketer, traveller, hunter and solider Philip Vanderbyl.
Revised:  His son was the cricketer, traveller, hunter and soldier Philip Vanderbyl.
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Original: Dimensions Rugby league is played on a field 112-122 by 68 metres (122.5 -133.4 × 74.3 yards).
Revised: Dimensions Rugby league is played on a field 112–122 by 68 metres (122.5 -133.4 × 74.3 yards).
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Original: Dimensions Rugby league is played on a field 112-122 by 68 metres (122.5 -133.4 × 74.3 yards).
Revised: Dimensions Rugby league is played on a field 112-122 by 68 metres (122.5 –133.4 × 74.3 yards).
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Original:  A scoring area called the in-goal area extends 6–11 metres (6.6 -12 yards) from each try-line to each dead ball line.
Revised:  A scoring area called the in-goal area extends 6–11 metres (6.6 –12 yards) from each try-line to each dead ball line.
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Original:  These lines, as well as the goal lines, dead ball lines and touch lines are 15 centimetres wide and white in colour, the only exception being the 40-metre lines, which are usually coloured red to distinguish them for the determination of 40-20 kicks in play.
Revised:  These lines, as well as the goal lines, dead ball lines and touch lines are 15 centimetres wide and white in colour, the only exception being the 40-metre lines, which are usually coloured red to distinguish them for the determination of 40–20 kicks in play.
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Original:  Another concern cited was that the corner post might be made to make contact with a rolling ball to ensure the defending team gains possession with a 20 metre restart.
Revised:  Another concern cited was that the corner post might be made to make contact with a rolling ball to ensure the defending team gains possession with a 20-metre restart.
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Original:  External links Dimensions for rugby league - Government of Western Australia, Department of Sport and Recreation
Revised:  External links Dimensions for rugby league – Government of Western Australia, Department of Sport and Recreation
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Original:  An 8 point try is awarded if a player is fouled in the act of scoring a try but still grounds the ball.
Revised:  An 8-point try is awarded if a player is fouled in the act of scoring a try but still grounds the ball.
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Original:  The touch lines and dead ball lines are  out of play.
Revised:  The touch lines and dead ball lines are considered out of play.
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Original: Dimensions A rugby league pitch (or field) is 68m wide and 112-122m long.
Revised: Dimensions A rugby league pitch (or field) is wide and long.
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Original:  The try lines (or goal lines) stand 100m apart.
Revised:  The try lines (or goal lines) stand apart.
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Original:  On each one is a goal post that is 5.5m wide and at least 16m high, with a crossbar set 3m above the ground.
Revised:  On each one is a goal post that is wide and at least 16m high, with a crossbar set 3m above the ground.
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Original:  On each one is a goal post that is 5.5m wide and at least 16m high, with a crossbar set 3m above the ground.
Revised:  On each one is a goal post that is 5.5m wide and at least high, with a crossbar set 3m above the ground.
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Original:  On each one is a goal post that is 5.5m wide and at least 16m high, with a crossbar set 3m above the ground.
Revised:  On each one is a goal post that is 5.5m wide and at least 16m high, with a crossbar set above the ground.
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Original:  The field of play is a fixed size - 100m long and 68m wide and does not include the line markings, meaning all touchlines and dead ball lines are considered out of play.
Revised:  The field of play is a fixed size – long and wide and does not include the line markings, meaning all touchlines and dead ball lines are considered out of play.
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Original:  they are 100 metres (109.4 yards) apart.
Revised:  they are apart.
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Original:  A scoring area called the in-goal area extends 6–11 metres (6.6–12 yards) from each try-line to each dead ball line.
Revised:  A scoring area called the in-goal area extends from each try-line to each dead ball line.
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Original:  Free kicks are taken 10 metres in from the point where the ball entered touch after being kicked out to gain ground from a penalty.
Revised:  Free kicks are taken in from the point where the ball entered touch after being kicked out to gain ground from a penalty.
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Original: RLIF, 2004: 32 Markings Lines with distance markers transverse the field every 10 metres perpendicular to the touch lines.
Revised: RLIF, 2004: 32 Markings Lines with distance markers transverse the field every perpendicular to the touch lines.
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Original:  The broken lines 10 metres and 20 metres in from the touch lines are 10 centimetres wide and white in colour.
Revised:  The broken lines 10 metres and 20 metres in from the touch lines are wide and white in colour.
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Original:  These numbers are 2 metres high . Objects On each goal line are two goal posts 5.5 metres apart connected by a cross bar 3 metres from the ground.
Revised:  These numbers are . Objects On each goal line are two goal posts 5.5 metres apart connected by a cross bar 3 metres from the ground.
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Original:  These numbers are 2 metres high . Objects On each goal line are two goal posts 5.5 metres apart connected by a cross bar 3 metres from the ground.
Revised:  These numbers are 2 metres high . Objects On each goal line are two goal posts 5.5 metres apart connected by a cross bar from the ground.
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Original:  Each goal post is 16 metres in height (however they can be built higher) and for the purpose of judging a goal are considered to extend upwards indefinitely.
Revised:  Each goal post is in height (however they can be built higher) and for the purpose of judging a goal are considered to extend upwards indefinitely.
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Original:  The bottom two metres of a goal post is recommended to be padded to protect players from injury.
Revised:  The bottom of a goal post is recommended to be padded to protect players from injury.
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Original: RLIF, 2004: 4 The post must consist of non-rigid material and should be at least 1.3m (4.1ft) metres in height.
Revised: RLIF, 2004: 4 The post must consist of non-rigid material and should be at least in height.
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Original: (814–891) was a Japanese Buddhist monk the founder of the Jimon School of Tendai Buddhism, and Chief Abbot of Miidera at the foot of Mount Hiei.
Revised: (814–891) was a Japanese Buddhist monk who founded of the Jimon School of Tendai Buddhism, and Chief Abbot of Miidera at the foot of Mount Hiei.
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Original:  Rivalres between the followers of different zasu was not anything new at that time.
Revised:  Rivalres between the followers of different zasu were not anything new at that time.
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Original:  During his twelve years on Hiei, Enchin himself had seen a conflict between direct disciples of Saichō (namely Enchō and Kosho) and the disciples of his own master, the second Tendai zasu Gishin.
Revised:  During his twelve years on Hiei, Enchin himself saw a conflict between direct disciples of Saichō (namely Enchō and Kosho) and the disciples of his own master, the second Tendai zasu Gishin.
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Original:  After the death of Gishin his main follower Enshu was elected to be the third zasu but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu with his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
Revised:  After the death of Gishin his main follower Enshu was elected to be the third zasu but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu and his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
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Original:  He warned that though Enryakuji was founded with the native gods (kami) in mind, neither Enryakuji nor Miidera were at the time worshipping the gods of Mount Hiei, and that this was a dangerous violation of Confucian principles.
Revised:  He warned that though Enryakuji was founded with the native gods (kami) in mind, neither Enryakuji nor Miidera were at the time worshiping the gods of Mount Hiei, and that this was a dangerous violation of Confucian principles.
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Original:  In a memorial speech in 887, he is said to have discussed the respect T'ang China had for Japan because of Japan's encouragement and welcoming of the ideals of Li (Propriety) and Yi (Righteousness).
Revised:  In a memorial speech in 887, he is said to have discussed the respect T'ang China had for Japan because of Japan's encouragement and welcoming of the ideals of Li and Yi (Righteousness).
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Original:  He warned that though Enryakuji was founded with the native gods (kami) in mind, neither Enryakuji nor Miidera were at the time worshiping the gods of Mount Hiei, and that this was a dangerous violation of Confucian principles.
Revised:  He warned that though Enryakuji was founded with the native gods (kami) in mind, "no such officiating monks are provided for the main deities of the mountain. This is certainly a breach of Li. There ought to be two monks to worship the two gods."
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Original:  After the death of Gishin his main follower Enshu was elected to be the third zasu but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu and his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
Revised:  After the death of Gishin his main follower Enshu was elected as the third zasu but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu and his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
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Original: (814–891) was a Japanese Buddhist monk who founded of the Jimon School of Tendai Buddhism , and Chief Abbot of Miidera at the foot of Mount Hiei.
Revised: (814–891) was a Japanese Buddhist monk who founded of the Jimon school of Tendai Buddhism , and Chief Abbot of Miidera at the foot of Mount Hiei.
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Original: (814–891) was a Japanese Buddhist monk who founded of the Jimon School of Tendai Buddhism , and Chief Abbot of Miidera at the foot of Mount Hiei.
Revised: (814–891) was a Japanese Buddhist monk who founded of the Jimon School of Tendai Buddhism and Chief Abbot of Miidera at the foot of Mount Hiei.
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Original: (814–891) was a Japanese Buddhist monk who founded of the Jimon School of Tendai Buddhism , and Chief Abbot of Miidera at the foot of Mount Hiei.
Revised: (814–891) was a Japanese Buddhist monk who founded of the Jimon School of Tendai Buddhism , and Chief Abbot of Mii-dera at the foot of Mount Hiei.
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Original:  After succeeding to the post of Tendai Zasu, or  Chief Tendai Abbot  , in 873, a strong rivalry developed between his followers and those of Ennin's at the Enryakuji;
Revised:  After succeeding to the post of Tendai Zasu, or " Chief Tendai Abbot , in 873, a strong rivalry developed between his followers and those of Ennin's at the Enryakuji;
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Original:  After succeeding to the post of Tendai Zasu, or  Chief Tendai Abbot  , in 873, a strong rivalry developed between his followers and those of Ennin's at the Enryakuji;
Revised:  After succeeding to the post of Tendai Zasu, or Chief Tendai Abbot " , in 873, a strong rivalry developed between his followers and those of Ennin's at the Enryakuji;
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Original:  After succeeding to the post of Tendai Zasu, or  Chief Tendai Abbot  , in 873, a strong rivalry developed between his followers and those of Ennin's at the Enryakuji;
Revised:  After succeeding to the post of Tendai Zasu, or Chief Tendai Abbot , in 873, a strong rivalry developed between his followers and those of Ennin's at Enryaku-ji
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Original:  During his twelve years on Hiei, Enchin himself saw a conflict between direct disciples of Saichō (namely Enchō and Kosho ) and the disciples of his own master, the second Tendai zasu Gishin.
Revised:  During his twelve years on Hiei, Enchin himself saw a conflict between direct disciples of Saichō (namely Enchō and Kōshō ) and the disciples of his own master, the second Tendai zasu Gishin.
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Original:  After the death of Gishin  his main follower Enshu was elected as the third zasu  but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu and his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
Revised:  After the death of Gishin , his main follower Enshu was elected as the third zasu but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu and his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
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Original:  After the death of Gishin  his main follower Enshu was elected as the third zasu  but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu and his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
Revised:  After the death of Gishin his main follower , Enshu, was elected as the third zasu but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu and his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
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Original:  After the death of Gishin  his main follower Enshu was elected as the third zasu  but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu and his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
Revised:  After the death of Gishin his main follower Enshu was elected as the third zasu , but Enchō and Kosho objected and finally forced Enshu and his followers to leave Mount Hiei.
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