wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The child contracted the H5N1 bird flu virus in January but we only got confirmation from the CDC on Wednesday it was a human bird flu case." Khan commented on preventative measures being taken by the government, saying : " We 're destroying the birds and eggs as soon as we have any report of bird flu at any farm in the country."
Revised:  The child contracted the H5N1 bird flu virus in January but we only got confirmation from the CDC on Wednesday it was a human bird flu case." Khan commented on preventative measures being taken by the government, saying : " we 're destroying the birds and eggs as soon as we have any report of bird flu at any farm in the country."
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Original:  Bangladesh was first hit by bird flu in February 2007  and after a period of dormancy  was hit again in January 2008.
Revised:  Bangladesh was first hit by bird flu in February 2007 , and after a period of dormancy was hit again in January 2008.
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Original:  Bangladesh was first hit by bird flu in February 2007  and after a period of dormancy  was hit again in January 2008.
Revised:  Bangladesh was first hit by bird flu in February 2007 and after a period of dormancy , was hit again in January 2008.
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Original: According to a study performed by the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration's (NOAA) Pacific Marine Environmental Laboratory, the level of acid in the world's oceans is rising, but decades before scientists expected the levels to rise.
Revised: According to a study performed by the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration's (NOAA) Pacific Marine Environmental Laboratory, the level of acid in the world's oceans is rising, decades before scientists expected the levels to rise.
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Original:  The study was performed on the coastal waters of the Pacific Ocean from Baja California, Mexico to Vancouver, British Columbia  where tests showed that acid levels in some areas near the edge of the Continental Shelf were high enough to corrode the shells of some sea creatures as well as some corals.
Revised:  The study was performed on the coastal waters of the Pacific Ocean from Baja California, Mexico to Vancouver, British Columbia , where tests showed that acid levels in some areas near the edge of the Continental Shelf were high enough to corrode the shells of some sea creatures as well as some corals.
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Original:  Feely. The  seas and oceans work constantly to clean the Earth's air, which absorb 1/3 to 1/2 of the carbon dioxide generated by humans.
Revised:  Feely. The seas and oceans constantly clean the Earth's air, which absorb 1/3 to 1/2 of the carbon dioxide generated by humans.
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Original:  Feely. The  seas and oceans work constantly to clean the Earth's air, which absorb 1/3 to 1/2 of the carbon dioxide generated by humans.
Revised:  Feely. The seas and oceans work constantly to clean the Earth's air, absorbing 1/3 to 1/2 of the carbon dioxide generated by humans.
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Original:  As the oceans absorb more of the gas, the water becomes more acidic, reducing the amount of carbonate which shellfish such as clams and oysters use to form their shells and the levels of carbonic acid increase .
Revised:  As the oceans absorb more of the gas, the water becomes more acidic, reducing the amount of carbonate which shellfish such as clams and oysters use to form their shells , and increasing the levels of carbonic acid increase .
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Original:  As the oceans absorb more of the gas, the water becomes more acidic, reducing the amount of carbonate which shellfish such as clams and oysters use to form their shells and the levels of carbonic acid increase .
Revised:  As the oceans absorb more of the gas, the water becomes more acidic, reducing the amount of carbonate which shellfish such as clams and oysters use to form their shells and the levels of carbonic acid .
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Original:  According to the study, stated Feely, since the Industrial Revolution began, the oceans and seas have absorbed more than 525 billion tons of carbon dioxide 
Revised:  Feely noted that, according to the study, stated Feely, since the Industrial Revolution began, the oceans and seas have absorbed more than 525 billion tons of carbon dioxide 
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Original:  According to the study, stated Feely, since the Industrial Revolution began, the oceans and seas have absorbed more than 525 billion tons of carbon dioxide 
Revised:  According to the study, the oceans and seas have absorbed more than 525 billion tons of carbon dioxide 
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Original:  The men intend to appeal   
Revised:  The men intend to appeal . 
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Original:  Third defendant traffic superintendent Guenther Mueller  was unable to face trial and due to suicide fears.
Revised:  Third defendant traffic superintendent Guenther Mueller , was unable to face trial and due to suicide fears.
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Original:  Third defendant traffic superintendent Guenther Mueller  was unable to face trial and due to suicide fears.
Revised:  Third defendant traffic superintendent Guenther Mueller was unable to face trial due to suicide fears.
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Original:  His prosecution will continue at a later date.
Revised:  His prosecution will occur at a later date.
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Original:  He is said to be the most important person facing charges, as he cleared the train to proceed when in fact the line was blocked
Revised:  He is said to be the most important person facing charges, as he cleared the train to proceed when , in fact, the line was blocked
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Original: The state court at Osnabrueck fined then track manager Guenter Steinmetz 24,000 euros and his successor Joerg Metzner 20,000 Euros.
Revised: The state court in Osnabrück fined then track manager Guenter Steinmetz 24,000 euros and his successor Joerg Metzner 20,000 Euros.
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Original:  He is said to be the most important person facing charges, as he cleared the train to proceed when, in fact, the line was blocked  
Revised:  He is said to be the most important person facing charges, as he cleared the train to proceed when, in fact, the line was blocked . 
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Original:  This particular Transrapid sat 1cm above the rails and featured a rail-hugging design that reduced the risk of derailments.
Revised:  This particular Transrapid sat 1 cm above the rails and featured a rail-hugging design that reduced the risk of derailments.
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Original:  The state court in Osnabrück fined then track manager Guenter Steinmetz 24,000 euros and his successor Joerg Metzner 20,000 Euros .
Revised:  The state court in Osnabrück fined then track manager Guenter Steinmetz 24,000 euro and his successor Joerg Metzner 20,000 Euros .
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Original:  The state court in Osnabrück fined then track manager Guenter Steinmetz 24,000 euros and his successor Joerg Metzner 20,000 Euros .
Revised:  The state court in Osnabrück fined then track manager Guenter Steinmetz 24,000 euros and his successor Joerg Metzner 20,000 euro .
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Original: A wax figure of Rattana Pestonji at the National Film Archive of Thailand's museum.
Revised:  Thailand's museum.
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Original: The Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, a polygamist sect led by Warren Jeffs – jailed last year for the rape and forced marriage of a 14 year old girl – is a breakaway branch of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, which abandoned the practice of polygamy in 1890.
Revised: The 
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Original:  The report then claimed there were five possible cases of abuse, "There was no evidence that any of the female children other than the five identified as having become pregnant between the ages of fifteen and seventeen were victims or potential victims of sexual or other physical abuse;" In addition to Texas, the group have compounds in Hildale, Mancos and many other places.
Revised:  report then claimed there were five possible cases of abuse, "There was no evidence that any of the female children other than the five identified as having become pregnant between the ages of fifteen and seventeen were victims or potential victims of sexual or other physical abuse;" In addition to Texas, the group have compounds in Hildale, Mancos and many other places.
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Original: Finally, for state custody to be allowed there must also have been "reasonable efforts have been made to enable the child to return home . "  A lower court was given 10 days to make a decision on whether the above requirements are met.
Revised: Finally, for state custody to be allowed there must also have been "reasonable efforts have been made to enable the child to return home " A lower court was given 10 days to make a decision on whether the above requirements are met.
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Original: Finally, for state custody to be allowed there must also have been "reasonable efforts have been made to enable the child to return home . "  A lower court was given 10 days to make a decision on whether the above requirements are met.
Revised: Finally, for state custody to be allowed there must also have been "reasonable efforts have been made to enable the child to return home . " . A lower court was given 10 days to make a decision on whether the above requirements are met.
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Original:  The FLDS said in an open letter the the governor of Texas that a "critical crisis" was unfolding due to these recent incidents.
Revised:  The FLDS said in an open letter the the Governor of Texas that a "critical crisis" was unfolding due to these recent incidents.
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Original:  It said that  "the only danger to the male children or the female children who had not reached puberty identified by the Department was the Department’s assertion that the pervasive belief system of the FLDS community groomed the males to be perpetrators of sexual abuse later in life and taught the girls to submit to sexual abuse after reaching puberty."
Revised:  It said that : "the only danger to the male children or the female children who had not reached puberty identified by the Department was the Department’s assertion that the pervasive belief system of the FLDS community groomed the males to be perpetrators of sexual abuse later in life and taught the girls to submit to sexual abuse after reaching puberty."
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Original:  The document also noted that  "There was no evidence that the male children, or the female children who had not reached puberty, were victims of sexual or other physical abuse or in danger of being victims of sexual or other physical abuse."
Revised:  The document also noted that : "There was no evidence that the male children, or the female children who had not reached puberty, were victims of sexual or other physical abuse or in danger of being victims of sexual or other physical abuse."
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Original:  It also reportaed that "While there was evidence that twenty females had become pregnant between the ages of thirteen and seventeen, there was no evidence regarding the marital status of these girls when they became pregnant or the circumstances under which they became pregnant other than the general allegation that the girls were living in an FLDS community with a belief system that condoned underage marriage and sex."
Revised:  The website reported that: "While there was evidence that twenty females had become pregnant between the ages of thirteen and seventeen, there was no evidence regarding the marital status of these girls when they became pregnant or the circumstances under which they became pregnant other than the general allegation that the girls were living in an FLDS community with a belief system that condoned underage marriage and sex."
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Original:  The report then claimed there were five possible cases of abuse, "There was no evidence that any of the female children other than the five identified as having become pregnant between the ages of fifteen and seventeen were victims or potential victims of sexual or other physical abuse ;
Revised:  The report claimed there were five possible cases of abuse, "There was no evidence that any of the female children other than the five identified as having become pregnant between the ages of fifteen and seventeen were victims or potential victims of sexual or other physical abuse ;
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Original:  The report then claimed there were five possible cases of abuse, "There was no evidence that any of the female children other than the five identified as having become pregnant between the ages of fifteen and seventeen were victims or potential victims of sexual or other physical abuse ;
Revised:  The report then claimed there were five possible cases of abuse, "There was no evidence that any of the female children other than the five identified as having become pregnant between the ages of fifteen and seventeen were victims or potential victims of sexual or other physical abuse 
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Original:  "  In addition to Texas, the group have compounds in Hildale, Mancos and many other places.
Revised:  " . In addition to Texas, the group have compounds in Hildale, Mancos and many other places.
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Original:  "  In addition to Texas, the group have compounds in Hildale, Mancos and many other places.
Revised:  " In addition to Texas, the group has compounds in Hildale, Mancos and many other places.
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Original:  The church split from the more commonplace Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints due to the fact that it abandoned polygamy.
Revised:  The church split from the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints due to the fact that it abandoned polygamy.
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Original:  Although originally the mothers were allowed to stay with the children, they are no required to be separate unless the parents are aged under eighteen or the children are very young.
Revised:  Although originally the mothers were allowed to stay with the children, they are not required to be separate unless the parents are aged under eighteen or the children are very young.
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Original:  22 of the 32 on board were injured, four critically, after the bus smashed into a concrete pillar on the A10 near Blois in the small hours of yeaterday morning  
Revised:  22 of the 32 on board were injured, four critically, after the bus smashed into a concrete pillar on the A10 near Blois in the small hours of yeaterday morning . 
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Original:  It had been hired by Aziz, a French company that provides buses to tourists and small traders heading between France and Morocco  
Revised:  It had been hired by Aziz, a French company that provides buses to tourists and small traders heading between France and Morocco . 
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Original:  Transport Minister Dominique Bussereau, who visited the scene shortly after the accident, said that “The incredible state of the bus showed that the impact was extremely violent.     
Revised:  Transport Minister Dominique Bussereau, who visited the scene shortly after the accident, said that “The incredible state of the bus showed that the impact was extremely violent. ” 
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Original: The   French Interior Ministry took the rare step of activating an emergency plan to ensure rapid response from large numbers of rescuers and resources.
Revised: The The French Interior Ministry took the rare step of activating an emergency plan to ensure rapid response from large numbers of rescuers and resources.
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Original:  There was good weather in the region of the town of Suevres, where the accident occured, and very little traffic was using the road at the time, thought to be around 2.50am (0050 GMT)  
Revised:  There was good weather in the region of the town of Suevres, where the accident occured, and very little traffic was using the road at the time, thought to be around 2.50am (0050 GMT) . 
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Original:  22 of the 32 on board were injured, four critically, after the bus smashed into a concrete pillar on the A10 near Blois in the small hours of yeaterday morning.
Revised:  22 of the 32 on board were injured, four critically, after the bus smashed into a concrete pillar on the A10 near Blois in the small hours of yesterday morning.
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Original:  These then manouvered themselves above and behind the aircraft, which is an aggresive position considered optimal should a shootdown be required   
Revised:  These then manouvered themselves above and behind the aircraft, which is an aggresive position considered optimal should a shootdown be required . 
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Original:  He also said they only found out after reporters began asking them what had happened  
Revised:  He also said they only found out after reporters began asking them what had happened . 
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Original:  These then manouvered themselves above and behind the aircraft, which is an aggresive position considered optimal should a shootdown be required.
Revised:  These then manouvered themselves above and behind the aircraft, which is an aggressive position considered optimal should a shootdown be required.
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Original:  The methods used for this attack were not specified . Category:Ir
Revised:  The methods used for this attack were not specified Category:Ir
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Original:  The methods used for this attack were not specified . Category:Ir
Revised:  The methods used for this attack were not specified . 
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Original: Relations between U.S. forces and Iraqi police and  civilians were damaged recently by a helicopter airstrike that resulted in the deaths of 7 people.
Revised: Relations between U.S. forces , Iraqi police and civilians were damaged recently by a helicopter airstrike that resulted in the deaths of 7 people.
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Original: Relations between U.S. forces and Iraqi police and  civilians were damaged recently by a helicopter airstrike that resulted in the deaths of 7 people.
Revised: Relations between U.S. forces and Iraqi police and Iraqi civilians were damaged recently by a helicopter airstrike that resulted in the deaths of 7 people.
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Original:  The identities of those 7 people are disputed, with US forces claiming 5 militants killed and 2 children, while Iraqi police report that all 7 killed were civilians.
Revised:  The identities of those killed are disputed, with US forces claiming 5 militants killed and 2 children, while Iraqi police report that all 7 killed were civilians.
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Original:  Col. Jerry O'Hara has stated that U.S. led forces "sincerely regrets the injury of any innocent civilians and condemns those terrorists who place civilians recklessly in harm's way." Col.
Revised:  Colonel Jerry O'Hara has stated that U.S. led forces "sincerely regrets the injury of any innocent civilians and condemns those terrorists who place civilians recklessly in harm's way." Col.
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Original:  Mudhir Qaisi police chief in Baiji near where this event occurred, says the 7 were Sunni farmers traveling through the Mizari region.
Revised:  Mudhir Qaisi police chief in Baiji , says that all seven killed were Sunni farmers traveling through the Mizari region.
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Original:  Fulaiyh Shimmari, relative of those killed , reports that many family and friends were gathered for the release of a family remember from U.S custody.
Revised:  Fulaiyh Shimmari, a relative of a victim , reports that many family and friends were gathered for the release of a family remember from U.S custody.
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Original:  Shimmari states that when U.S  forces were sighted many , including himself, began to flee in cars and on foot.
Revised:  Shimmari states that when U.S . forces were sighted many , including himself, began to flee in cars and on foot.
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Original:  Shimmari states that when U.S  forces were sighted many , including himself, began to flee in cars and on foot.
Revised:  Shimmari states that when U.S forces were sighted , many people , including himself, began to flee in cars and on foot.
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Original:  During the engagementhe said that 3 of the 7 people in the car were killed, including one child .
Revised:  He noted that, during the engagement, three of the seven people in the car were killed, including one child .
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Original:   U.S. forces present a different account, claiming that five militants died. they fired warning shots and they engaged only after the occupants exhibited hostile intent  .
Revised:  U.S. forces fired warning shots and they engaged only after the occupants exhibited hostile intent .
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Original:   U.S. forces present a different account, claiming that five militants died. they fired warning shots and they engaged only after the occupants exhibited hostile intent  .
Revised:  U.S. forces present a different account, claiming that five militants died. they fired warning shots , and when some of the occupants of the premises exhibited hostile intent .
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Original: Vancouver Whitecaps men suffered their second defeat of the season after falling 2-0 to Pacific Northwest rivals Seattle Sounders on Friday evening.
Revised: Vancouver Whitecaps lost their 2nd game of the season after falling 2-0 to Pacific Northwest rivals Seattle Sounders on Friday evening.
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Original: Vancouver Whitecaps men suffered their second defeat of the season after falling 2-0 to Pacific Northwest rivals Seattle Sounders on Friday evening.
Revised: Vancouver Whitecaps men suffered their second defeat of the season after losing 2-0 to Pacific Northwest rivals Seattle Sounders on Friday evening.
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Original: Vancouver Whitecaps men suffered their second defeat of the season after falling 2-0 to Pacific Northwest rivals Seattle Sounders on Friday evening.
Revised: Vancouver Whitecaps men suffered their second defeat of the season after falling 2-0 to Seattle Sounders on Friday evening.
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Original: Vancouver Whitecaps men suffered their second defeat of the season after falling 2-0 to Pacific Northwest rivals Seattle Sounders on Friday evening.
Revised: Vancouver Whitecaps men suffered their second defeat of the season after falling 2-0 to Pacific Northwest rivals Seattle Sounders on 
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Original:  Early goals by Seattle 's Josh Gardner and Sebastien Le Toux effectively ended this latest Interstate 5 derby at Swangard Stadium, as the Whitecaps looked far from their best in their opening Cascadia Cup game of 2008.
Revised:  Early goals by Seattle 's Josh Gardner and Sebastien Le Toux 
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Original:  With a trip to Portland to face the Timbers on Saturday, Vancouver will hope to get Friday's defeat out of their system as soon as possible with an improved display at PGE Park .
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Original:  Midfielder John Fishbaugher replaced Youssouf Kante in the Washington State club's starting XI.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Despite a pleasant evening for soccer at Swangard, 5,146 Whitecaps fans were suddenly left in shock  , as Seattle blitzed their hosts with two quick and decisive goals in the opening exchanges.
Revised:  Midfielder John Fishbaugher replaced Youssouf Kante in the Washington State club's starting XI.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% fans were left in shock , as Seattle blitzed their hosts with two quick and decisive goals in the opening exchanges.
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