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Original:    " "[I]t's much more tailored to what the intel[ligence] is telling us, what the threat is telling us, as opposed to stopping all individuals of a particular nationality or all individuals using a particular passport," commented a senior administration official who wished to remain anonymous to media 
Revised:  " "[I]t's much more tailored to what the intel[ligence] is telling us, what the threat is telling us, as opposed to stopping all individuals of a particular nationality or all individuals using a particular passport," commented a senior administration official who wished to remain anonymous to media . He added that the former measures were a "blunt-force instrument"
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Original: A Chinese merchant ship ran aground of the coast of Australia and began leaking oil into the ocean near the Great Barrier Reef  .
Revised: A Chinese merchant ship has run aground off the coast of Australia and began leaking oil into the ocean near the Great Barrier Reef .
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Original:  One such person, a spokesman for the Capricorn Conservation Council, said that "We are outraged that no marine pilot is required on ships between Gladstone and Cairns." Cairns is a city on the norther coast of Australia
Revised:  One such person, a spokesman for the Capricorn Conservation Council, said that "We are outraged that no marine pilot is required on ships between Gladstone and Cairns." Cairns is a city on the northern coast of Australia
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Original: The ship, the Shen Neng I , was carrying 950 tonnes of oil, along with 65,000 tonnes of coal, from the Gladstone, a port in Queensland, Australia, to China.
Revised: The ship, the Shen Neng 1 , was carrying 950 tonnes of oil, along with 65,000 tonnes of coal, from the Gladstone, a port in Queensland, Australia, to China.
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Original: Maoist guerrillas detonated a land mine in Orissa, India today, thereby blowing up a bus ferrying Special Operation Group (SOG) personnel of the state.
Revised: Maoist guerrillas detonated a land mine in Orissa, India today, blowing up a bus ferrying Special Operation Group (SOG) personnel of the state.
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Original:  Deputy Inspector General of Police Sanjeeb Panda stated  , "One of the buses was blasted by the Maoists.
Revised:  Deputy Inspector General of Police Sanjeeb Panda stated that , "One of the buses was blasted by the Maoists.
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Original:  A short firing between the Maoists and the jawans also took place according to sources.
Revised:  A short shooting battle between the Maoists and the jawans also took place according to sources.
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Original:  According to Press Trust of India agency, a medical team accompanied by ambulances has been sent to the scene of the attack.
Revised:  A medical team accompanied by ambulances has been sent to the scene of the attack.
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Original:  At least a dozen insurgents were killed in this attack  according to local officials . Officials said only one soldier was injured in the attack.
Revised:  At least a dozen insurgents were killed in this attack , according to local officials . Officials said only one soldier was injured in the attack.
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Original:  At least a dozen insurgents were killed in this attack  according to local officials . Officials said only one soldier was injured in the attack.
Revised:  At least a dozen insurgents were killed in this attack according to local authorities . Officials said only one soldier was injured in the attack.
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Original: Called the "Carrie Bradshaw" of bloggers by the New York Times, suburban New Yorker Stephanie Klein's online musings in her personal blog Greek Tragedy has gained the attention of Hollywood and the book industry   .  NBC Universal is developing the blog-based book into a weekly sitcom based on Klein’s life for its NBC television network.
Revised: Called the "Carrie Bradshaw" of bloggers by the New York Times, suburban New Yorker Stephanie Klein's online musings in her personal blog Greek Tragedy has gained the attention of Hollywood and the book industry . NBC Universal is developing the blog-based book into a fictionalized weekly sitcom version of Klein’s life for its NBC television network.
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Original: Since January 2004, Klein has written her blog which goes into the intimate details of her life as a 29-year-old professional single woman living in New York City's northwestern suburb of Prospect Park, New Jersey and then subsequently while living as a divorcee who currently resides on the Upper West Side of Manhattan.
Revised: Since January 2004, Klein has written her blog which goes into the intimate details of her life as a 29-year-old professional single woman living in New York City's northwestern suburb of Prospect Park, New Jersey . Ms. Klein is a divorcee who currently resides on the Upper West Side of Manhattan.
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Original:  Since January 2004, Klein has written her blog which goes into the intimate details of her life as a 29-year-old professional  single woman living in New York City's northwestern suburb of Prospect Park, New Jersey . Ms. Klein is a divorcee who currently resides on the Upper West Side of Manhattan.
Revised:  Since January 2004, Klein has written her blog which goes into the intimate details of her life as a 29-year-old professional single woman living on the Upper West Side of Manhattan, one of New York City's northwestern suburb of Prospect Park, New Jersey . Ms. Klein is a divorcee who currently resides on the Upper West Side of Manhattan.
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Original:  Ms. Klein is a divorcee who currently resides on the Upper West Side of Manhattan.
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Original: "The explosion ( at the Iranian embassy ) was really strong," said Abu Ahmed, a taxi driver who was an eyewitness of one of the blasts.
Revised: "The explosion at the Iranian embassy ) was really strong," said Abu Ahmed, a taxi driver who was an eyewitness of one of the blasts.
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Original: "The explosion ( at the Iranian embassy ) was really strong," said Abu Ahmed, a taxi driver who was an eyewitness of one of the blasts.
Revised: "The explosion ( at the Iranian embassy was really strong," said Abu Ahmed, a taxi driver who was an eyewitness of one of the blasts.
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Original:  One reached magnitude 5.1, another one, which occurred in the same place as the first quake, reached 5.4, and a third in Sonora reached 5.1. A Wikinews corespondent in the Los Angeles area, Mike Morales, felt the earthquake and said , "I was at home and then I almost thought it was vertigo, but really it was the earthquake.
Revised:  One reached magnitude 5.1, another one, which occurred in the same place as the first quake, reached 5.4, and a third in Sonora reached 5.1. A Wikinews corespondent in the Los Angeles area, Mike Morales, felt the earthquake and reports , "I was at home and then I almost thought it was vertigo, but really it was the earthquake.
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Original:  It was reported that a number of people were stuck in an elevator in Disneyland , Anaheim.
Revised:  It was reported that a number of people were stuck in an elevator in , Anaheim.
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Original:  According to the Chilean Oceanographic and Hydrographic Service (SHOA), no tsunamis are expected to reach the coast of Chile  
Revised:  According to the Chilean Oceanographic and Hydrographic Service (SHOA), no tsunamis are expected to reach the coast of Chile . 
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Original: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final Traralgon defeated Moe at Yallourn North this Saturday in the opening round of the Gippsland Football League season  April 3 Wonthaggi 9-9 (63)
Revised: 250px|Maffra defeated Moe in the Preliminary Final Traralgon defeated Moe at Yallourn North this Saturday in the opening round of the Gippsland Football League season . April 3 Wonthaggi 9-9 (63)
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Original:  v Leongatha 8-14 (62) April 10 Morwell 0-0 (00) v Warragul 0-0 (00) Drouin 0-0(00) v Maffra 0-0 (00 ) Background The Gippsland Football League (officially the Gippsland League, GL) is the only major league in Gippsland according to the Victorian Country Football, the governing body for Australian rules football in regional Victoria, Australia.
Revised:  d Leongatha 8-14 (62) April 10 Morwell 0-0 (00) v Warragul 0-0 (00) Drouin 0-0(00) v Maffra 0-0 (00 ) Background The Gippsland Football League (officially the Gippsland League, GL) is the only major league in Gippsland according to the Victorian Country Football, the governing body for Australian rules football in regional Victoria, Australia.
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Original:  v Leongatha 8-14 (62) April 10 Morwell 0-0 (00) v Warragul 0-0 (00) Drouin 0-0(00) v Maffra 0-0 (00 ) Background The Gippsland Football League (officially the Gippsland League, GL) is the only major league in Gippsland according to the Victorian Country Football, the governing body for Australian rules football in regional Victoria, Australia.
Revised:  v Leongatha 8-14 (62) April 10 Morwell 0-0 (00) v Warragul 0-0 (00) Drouin 0-0(00) v Maffra 0-0 (00 ) The Gippsland Football League (officially the Gippsland League, GL) is the only major league in Gippsland according to the Victorian Country Football, the governing body for Australian rules football in regional Victoria, Australia.
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Original:  __NOTOC__ Lower Grades Reserves: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 18's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 16's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 The Match In the photos  below, Moe are in the maroon shorts, Traralgon in the white shorts.
Revised:  Reserves: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 18's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 16's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 The Match In the photos below, Moe are in the maroon shorts, Traralgon in the white shorts.
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Original:  __NOTOC__ Lower Grades Reserves: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 18's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 16's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 The Match In the photos  below, Moe are in the maroon shorts, Traralgon in the white shorts.
Revised:  __NOTOC__ Lower Grades The Match In the photos below, Moe are in the maroon shorts, Traralgon in the white shorts.
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Original:  __NOTOC__ Lower Grades Reserves: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 18's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 16's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 The Match In the photos  below, Moe are in the maroon shorts, Traralgon in the white shorts.
Revised:  __NOTOC__ Lower Grades Reserves: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 18's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 Under 16's: Moe 0-0 00 Traralgon 0-0 00 In the photos below, Moe are in the maroon shorts, Traralgon in the white shorts.
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Original:  "Our party had arranged a thanksgiving day to celebrate the changing of the name after 200 years of colonial legacy," he said to a private news agency  
Revised:  "Our party had arranged a thanksgiving day to celebrate the changing of the name after 200 years of colonial legacy," he said to a private news agency . 
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Original:  This attack was followed by a triple attack in Peshawar by suspected Islamist insurgents  
Revised:  This attack was followed by a triple attack in Peshawar by suspected Islamist insurgents . 
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Original:  They first opened fire at security personnel at the post near the consulate and then blasts went off," eye witness Siraj Afridi told Reuters news agency.
Revised:  They first opened fire at security personnel at the post near the consulate and then blasts went off," eywitness Siraj Afridi told Reuters news agency.
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Original:  The U.S. consulate in Islamabad denied receiving any information.
Revised:  The US consulate in Islamabad denied receiving any information.
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Original:  Images from new cameras have revealed that a section of foam weighing some 250g fell away from the external fuel tank during launch, but did not strike the Orbiter.
Revised:  Images from new cameras have revealed that a section of foam weighing some 250 g fell away from the external fuel tank during launch, but did not strike the Orbiter.
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Original:  A piece of foam striking the Columbia's wing during take-off in January 2003 was responsible for the loss of the craft as it made its re-entry to Earth's atmosphere.
Revised:  A piece of foam striking the Columbia's wing during take-off in January 2003 was responsible for the loss of the craft as it made its reentry to Earth's atmosphere.
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Original:  In a first, the Shuttle also performed a slow back-flip in some 180m from the ISS enabling the two-man crew of the space station to take high-resolution images of the underside of the Orbiter
Revised:  In a first, the Shuttle also performed a slow back-flip in some 180 m from the ISS enabling the two-man crew of the space station to take high-resolution images of the underside of the Orbiter
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Original: A Toyota Camry, one of Toyota's models that was affected by the recalls  US regulators intend to fine Toyota Motor Company $16.4 million over allegations that the company failed to notify government officials in "a timely way" about flaws in its vehicles that led to a major recall earlier this year.
Revised: A Toyota Camry, one of Toyota's models that was affected by the recalls . US regulators intend to fine Toyota Motor Company $16.4 million over allegations that the company failed to notify government officials in "a timely way" about flaws in its vehicles that led to a major recall earlier this year.
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Original: |alt=Military helicopter video footage of civilian humans and vehicle being destroyed by airstrike]] Following the release of classified video earlier this week  the US military is to carry out a review of an an 2007 airstike which occured in Baghdad.
Revised: |alt=Military helicopter video footage of civilian humans and vehicle being destroyed by airstrike]] Following the release of classified video earlier this week , the US military is to carry out a review of an an 2007 airstike which occured in Baghdad.
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Original: |alt=Military helicopter video footage of civilian humans and vehicle being destroyed by airstrike]] Following the release of classified video earlier this week  the US military is to carry out a review of an an 2007 airstike which occured in Baghdad.
Revised: |alt=Military helicopter video footage of civilian humans and vehicle being destroyed by airstrike]] Following the release of classified video earlier this week the US military is to carry out a review of a 2007 airstike which occured in Baghdad.
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Original:  At a press conference on April 5, 2010  at the National Press Club in Washington D.C., the whistleblowing wiki , Wikileaks released a video which appears to contradict the official US account of the attack.
Revised:  At a press conference on April 5, 2010 , at the National Press Club in Washington D.C., the whistleblowing wiki , Wikileaks released a video which appears to contradict the official US account of the attack.
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Original:  At a press conference on April 5, 2010  at the National Press Club in Washington D.C., the whistleblowing wiki , Wikileaks released a video which appears to contradict the official US account of the attack.
Revised:  At a press conference on April 5, 2010 at the National Press Club in Washington D.C., the whistleblowing wiki Wikileaks released a video which appears to contradict the official US account of the attack.
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Original:  The attack led to the death of two Reuters journalists, driver Saeed Chmagh and photographer Namir Noor-Eldeen, and other Iraqi civilians.
Revised:  The attack led to the death of two Reuters journalists, driver Saeed Chmagh , photographer Namir Noor-Eldeen, and other Iraqi civilians.
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Original:  However the released video and the associated radio chatter suggests that the army aviators had mistakenly identified the camera equipment used by the journalists as weapons and it was the group of Iraqi civilians and journalists that were themselves which the target of the attack.
Revised:  However the released video and the associated radio chatter suggests that the army aviators had mistakenly identified the camera equipment used by the journalists as weapons , and the group of Iraqi civilians and journalists that were themselves which the target of the attack.
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Original:  However the released video and the associated radio chatter suggests that the army aviators had mistakenly identified the camera equipment used by the journalists as weapons and it was the group of Iraqi civilians and journalists that were themselves which the target of the attack.
Revised:  However the released video and the associated radio chatter suggests that the army aviators had mistakenly identified the camera equipment used by the journalists as weapons and it was the group of Iraqi civilians and journalists themselves were the target of the attack.
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Original:  The video and radio chatter have been confirmed as genuine by an U.S. Defense official speaking to reuters on the condition of anonymity.
Revised:  The video and radio chatter have been confirmed as genuine by a U.S. Defense official speaking to reuters on the condition of anonymity.
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Original:  The video and radio chatter have been confirmed as genuine by an U.S. Defense official speaking to reuters on the condition of anonymity.
Revised:  The video and radio chatter have been confirmed as genuine by an U.S. Defense official speaking to Reuters on the condition of anonymity.
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Original:  Wikileaks broke the encryption on the video after a public appeal for help  including an appeal for time on a supercomputer
Revised:  Wikileaks broke the encryption on the video after a public appeal for help , including an appeal for time on a supercomputer
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Original:  Wikileaks broke the encryption on the video after a public appeal for help, including an appeal for time on a supercomputer              
Revised:  Wikileaks broke the encryption on the video after a public appeal for help, including an appeal for time on a supercomputer . 
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Original:  Both women are German nationals  
Revised:  Both women are German nationals . 
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Original:  The Woman tried to take the body on to the plane in a wheel chair wearing sunglassesand claiming that the person was asleep.
Revised:  The women tried to take the body on to the plane in a wheel chair wearing sunglassesand claiming that the person was asleep.
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Original:  The Woman tried to take the body on to the plane in a wheel chair wearing sunglassesand claiming that the person was asleep.
Revised:  The Woman tried to take the body on to the plane in a wheelchair wearing sunglasses, and they claimed that the person was asleep.
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Original:  They had previously used a taxi to bring the corpse of the dead German relative from their home in Oldham.
Revised:  They had previously used a taxi to bring the corpse from their home in Oldham.
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Original:  The deception was discovered by check in staff, both Airport staff and the Taxi driver are said to be upset by  events.
Revised:  The deception was discovered by check-in staff; both airport staff and the Taxi driver are said to be upset by events.
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Original:  The deception was discovered by check in staff, both Airport staff and the Taxi driver are said to be upset by  events.
Revised:  The deception was discovered by check in staff, both Airport staff and the taxi driver are said to be upset by events.
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Original:  The deception was discovered by check in staff, both Airport staff and the Taxi driver are said to be upset by  events.
Revised:  The deception was discovered by check in staff, both Airport staff and the Taxi driver are said to be upset by the events.
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Original:  Though no explanation of there actionshas been made , the costs of transporting a body can be several thousand pounds.
Revised:  Though they have not explained their actions , the costs of transporting a body can be several thousand pounds.
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Original:  They are believed to have been arrested on suspicion of failing to report a death.
Revised:  They have been arrested on suspicion of failing to report a death.
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Original:  The couple however claim that Mr Jaran was alive until check in
Revised:  The two women, however, claim that Mr Jaran was alive until check in
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Original: In a scene reminiscent of the Hollywood film "Weekend at Bernie's" or Tom Sharpes book "The Throwback".
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Original:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] and casualties are quite high," he said  [ 
Revised:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] and casualties are quite high," he said . [ 
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Original:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] and casualties are quite high," he said  [ 
Revised:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] and casualties are quite high," he said [t 
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Original: The violence is reportedly still ongoing, according to police official Ashok Dwivedi.
Revised: The violence i still ongoing, according to police official Ashok Dwivedi.
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Original:   Fighting is still carrying on in the area, and we're having great difficulty getting news from there," he said to the Reuters news agency.
Revised:  " Fighting is still carrying on in the area, and we're having great difficulty getting news from there," he said to the Reuters news agency.
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Original: The violence i still ongoing, according to police official Ashok Dwivedi.
Revised: The violence is still ongoing, according to police official Ashok Dwivedi.
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Original:  It is the biggest loss of life security forces have suffered since launching a recent offensive against the rebels.
Revised:  It is the biggest loss of life security forces have suffered since launching the recent offensive against the rebels.
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Original:  India's Home Minister P  Chidambaram remarked that the convoys had apparently "walked" into a trap set by the Maoists.
Revised:  India's Home Minister P . Chidambaram remarked that the convoys had apparently "walked" into a trap set by the Maoists.
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Original:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] and casualties are quite high," he said . RK Vij, a Central Reserve Police Force spokesman, added that "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% t he injured troops have been evacuated by helicopter.
Revised:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] . Casualties are quite high," he said . RK Vij, a Central Reserve Police Force spokesman, added that "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% t he injured troops have been evacuated by helicopter.
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Original:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] and casualties are quite high," he said . RK Vij, a Central Reserve Police Force spokesman, added that "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% t he injured troops have been evacuated by helicopter.
Revised:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] and casualties are quite high," he said RK Vij, a Central Reserve Police Force spokesman, added that "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% t he injured troops have been evacuated by helicopter.
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Original:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] and casualties are quite high," he said . RK Vij, a Central Reserve Police Force spokesman, added that "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% t he injured troops have been evacuated by helicopter.
Revised:  They seem to have walked into a trap set by the [Maoists] and casualties are quite high," he said . %DIFDELCMD < [%%% t he injured troops have been evacuated by helicopter.
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