wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: 1928 deaths Category:1927 crimes Category:Kwaio people Category:20th-century executions by the United Kingdom Category:People executed by the United Kingdom by hanging Category:People executed by the British Solomon Islands Protectorate Category:People executed for murder Category:Solomon Islands people executed by hanging Category:Solomon Islands people convicted of murder Category:People convicted of murder by the Solomon Islands Category:People from Malaita Provin
Revised: 1928 deaths Category:1927 crimes Category:Kwaio people Category:20th-century executions by the United Kingdom Category:People executed by British colonies by hanging Category:People executed by the British Solomon Islands Protectorate Category:People executed for murder Category:Solomon Islands people executed by hanging Category:Solomon Islands people convicted of murder Category:People convicted of murder by the Solomon Islands Category:People from Malaita Provin
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Original: 1928 deaths Category:1927 crimes Category:Kwaio people Category:20th-century executions by the United Kingdom Category:People executed by the United Kingdom by hanging Category:People executed by the British Solomon Islands Protectorate Category:People executed for murder Category:Solomon Islands people executed by hanging Category:Solomon Islands people convicted of murder Category:People convicted of murder by the Solomon Islands Category:People from Malaita Provin
Revised: 1928 deaths Category:1927 crimes Category:Kwaio people Category:20th-century executions by the United Kingdom Category:People executed by the United Kingdom by hanging Category:People executed by the British Solomon Islands Protectorate Category:People executed for murder Category:Solomon Islands people executed by hanging Category:Solomon Islands people convicted of murder Category:People convicted of murder by the Solomon Islands Category:People from Malaita Province Category:People executed by the Solomon Islands by hangi
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Original: References Roger M. Keesing and Peter Corris.
Revised: General references Roger M. Keesing and Peter Corris.
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Original:  The primary system for generating sales leads for home party plan sales is the home party itself: the salesperson uses the home party business model as a source for future business by asking attendees if they would like to host selling parties, too. url = URL
Revised:  The primary system for generating sales leads for home party plan sales is the home party itself: the salesperson uses the home party business model as a source for future business by asking attendees if they would like to host selling parties, too. 
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Original:  In the same area of the eyelid, near the base of the eyelashes are sweat glands called the "glands of Moll".
Revised:  In the same area of the eyelid, near the base of the eyelashes are apocrine glands called the "glands of Moll".
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Original:  The glands of Zeis are named after German ophthalmologist Eduard Zeis (1807–68) . Reference
Revised:  The glands of Zeis are named after German ophthalmologist Eduard Zeis (1807–68) Reference
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Original:  The glands of Zeis are named after German ophthalmologist Eduard Zeis (1807–68) . Reference
Revised:  The glands of Zeis are named after German ophthalmologist Eduard Zeis (1807–68) . 
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Original:  The puzzle was designed by William Sunners, a Brooklyn schoolteacher for a fee of $15,000 (roughly 4 years salary in that era).
Revised:  The puzzle was designed by William Sunners, a Brooklyn schoolteacher for a fee of 
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Original:  It means that if a force applied a pure metal slide easily but when metal alloys are present i.e the laye of different sized particles this stop the layers of ions from sliding over each other so easily when a force is aplied.
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Original: Introduction File:Born bronze - Bronze casts. jpg|Liquid bronze, being poured into molds during casting.
Revised:  File:Born bronze - Bronze casts. jpg|Liquid bronze, being poured into molds during casting.
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Original: Introduction File:Born bronze - Bronze casts. jpg|Liquid bronze, being poured into molds during casting.
Revised: Introduction 
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Original:  Around 10,000 years ago in the highlands of Anatolia (Turkey  , humans learned to smelt metals such as copper and tin from ore.
Revised:  Around 10,000 years ago in the highlands of Anatolia (Turkey ) , humans learned to smelt metals such as copper and tin from ore.
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Original:  Elemental iron , combined with non-metallic carbon or silicon , produces alloys called steel or silicon steel.
Revised:  Combining iron with non-metallic carbon or silicon , produces alloys called steel or silicon steel.
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Original:  Elemental iron , combined with non-metallic carbon or silicon , produces alloys called steel or silicon steel.
Revised:  Elemental iron , combined with non-metallic carbon or silicon produces alloys called steel or silicon steel.
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Original:  Unlike other substances that may contain metallic bases but do not behave as metals, such as aluminium oxide (sapphire), beryllium aluminium silicate (emerald) or sodium chloride (salt), an alloy will retain all the properties of a metal in the resulting material, such as electrical conductivity, ductility, opaqueness , and luster.
Revised:  Unlike other substances that may contain metallic bases but do not behave as metals, such as aluminium oxide (sapphire), beryllium aluminium silicate (emerald) or sodium chloride (salt), an alloy will retain all the properties of a metal in the resulting material, such as electrical conductivity, ductility, opacity , and luster.
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Original:  Alloys are used in a wide variety of applications, from the steel alloys, used in everything from buildings to automobiles to surgical tools, to exotic titanium-alloys used in the aerospace industry, to beryllium-copper alloys for non-sparking tools.
Revised:  Alloys are used in a wide variety of applications, from the steel alloys, used in everything from buildings to automobiles to surgical tools, to exotic titanium alloys used in the aerospace industry, to beryllium-copper alloys for non-sparking tools.
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Original:  Examples of alloys are steel, solder, brass, pewter, duralumin, bronze  and amalgams.
Revised:  Examples of alloys are steel, solder, brass, pewter, duralumin, bronze , and amalgams.
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Original: An alloy is a combination of metalsor metals combined with one or more other elements.
Revised: An alloy is an admixture of metals, or a metal combined with one or more other elements.
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Original: Sheffield Steel and America: A Century of Commercial and Technological Independence By Geoffrey Tweedale – Cambridge University Press 1987 pp. 66—68 Mushet's steel was quickly replaced by tungsten carbide steel, developed by Taylor and White in 1900, in which they doubled the tungsten content and added small amounts of chromium and vanadium, producing a superior steel for use is lathes and machining tools.
Revised: Sheffield Steel and America: A Century of Commercial and Technological Independence By Geoffrey Tweedale – Cambridge University Press 1987 pp. 66—68 Mushet's steel was quickly replaced by tungsten carbide steel, developed by Taylor and White in 1900, in which they doubled the tungsten content and added small amounts of chromium and vanadium, producing a superior steel for use in lathes and machining tools.
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Original:  For example, in its liquid state, titanium is a very strong solvent capable of dissolving most metals and elements.
Revised:  For example, in its liquid state, titanium is a very strong solvent capable of olving most metals and elements.
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Original:  They have features common to neoplastic cells of epithelial origins, such as numerous microvilli, junctional complexes, abnormal nuclei and nucleoli, abnormal mitochondria, annulate lamellae, and lipoidal bodies .
Revised:  They have features common to neoplastic cells of epithelial origins, such as numerous microvilli, junctional complexes, abnormal nuclei and nucleoli, abnormal mitochondria, annulate lamellae, and lipoidal bodies 
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Original:  See also DU145 LNCaP%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Cellosaurus entry for PC3%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Human cell lines Category:Cancer research Category:Urology Category:Prostate canc
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Cellosaurus entry for PC3%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Human cell lines Category:Cancer research Category:Urology Category:Prostate canc
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Original:  See also DU145 LNCaP%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Cellosaurus entry for PC3%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Human cell lines Category:Cancer research Category:Urology Category:Prostate canc
Revised:  See also DU145 LNCaP%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Cellosaurus entry for PC3%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Human cell lines Category:Cancer research Category:Urology Category:Prostate canc
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Original: ]] DU145 (DU-145) and PC3 human prostate cancer cell lines are the "classical" cell lines of prostatic cancer.
Revised: ]] DU145 (DU-145) and PC3 human prostate cancer cell line.
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Original:  DU145 cells have moderate metastatic potential compared to PC3 cells which have high metastatic potential.
Revised:  DU145 , PC3 cells which have high metastatic potential.
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Original:   The DU145 cell line was derived from a central nervous system metastasis, of primary prostate adenocarcinoma origin, removed during a parieto-occipital craniotomy.
Revised:  Characteristics The DU145 cell line was derived from a central nervous system metastasis, of primary prostate adenocarcinoma origin, removed during a parieto-occipital craniotomy.
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Original: Characteristics The DU145 cell line was derived from a central nervous system metastasis, of primary prostate adenocarcinoma origin, removed during a parieto-occipital craniotomy.
Revised:  The DU145 cell line was derived from a central nervous system metastasis, of primary prostate adenocarcinoma origin, removed during a parieto-occipital craniotomy.
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Original:  DU145 cells are androgen receptor positive . Research applications It has been demonstrated that administration of NFkappaB ligand RANKL promoted DU145 cell invasion in bone, resulting in osteolytic lesions.
Revised:  DU145 cells are androgen receptor positive Research applications It has been demonstrated that administration of NFkappaB ligand RANKL promoted DU145 cell invasion in bone, resulting in osteolytic lesions.
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Original:  It engages in: jighlighting issues of key importance, promoting studies of the function of finance in insurance, discussing the relevance of financial concepts and instruments to the industry, detecting new and promising theoretical developments, and diffusing knowledge and the results of research worldwide.
Revised:  It engages in: highlighting issues of key importance, promoting studies of the function of finance in insurance, discussing the relevance of financial concepts and instruments to the industry, detecting new and promising theoretical developments, and diffusing knowledge and the results of research worldwide.
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Original:  Issues and Practice, No.84 / July 1997 Insurance and Services International Trade, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.61 / October 1991 On the Application of the Continuous-Time Theory of Finance to Financial Intermediation and Insurance, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.52 / July 1989 External links  The Geneva Association website (known as the International Association for the Study of Insurance Economics) References
Revised:  Issues and Practice, No.84 / July 1997 Insurance and Services International Trade, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.61 / October 1991 On the Application of the Continuous-Time Theory of Finance to Financial Intermediation and Insurance, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.52 / July 1989 References The Geneva Association website (known as the International Association for the Study of Insurance Economics) References
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Original:  Issues and Practice, No.84 / July 1997 Insurance and Services International Trade, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.61 / October 1991 On the Application of the Continuous-Time Theory of Finance to Financial Intermediation and Insurance, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.52 / July 1989 External links  The Geneva Association website (known as the International Association for the Study of Insurance Economics) References
Revised:  Issues and Practice, No.84 / July 1997 Insurance and Services International Trade, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.61 / October 1991 On the Application of the Continuous-Time Theory of Finance to Financial Intermediation and Insurance, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.52 / July 1989 External links The Geneva Association Website (known as the International Association for the Study of Insurance Economics) References
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Original:  Issues and Practice, No.84 / July 1997 Insurance and Services International Trade, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.61 / October 1991 On the Application of the Continuous-Time Theory of Finance to Financial Intermediation and Insurance, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.52 / July 1989 External links  The Geneva Association website (known as the International Association for the Study of Insurance Economics) References
Revised:  Issues and Practice, No.84 / July 1997 Insurance and Services International Trade, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.61 / October 1991 On the Application of the Continuous-Time Theory of Finance to Financial Intermediation and Insurance, The Geneva Papers on Risk and Insurance - Issues and Practice, No.52 / July 1989 External links The Geneva Association website (known as the International Association for the Study of Insurance Economics) 
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Original:  Early life and education Ibrahim Imam was a Kanuri man from the Yerwa district of Borno.
Revised:  Early life and education Imam was a Kanuri man from the Yerwa district of Borno.
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Original:  Borno Youth Movement However, in 1954, Ibrahim resigned his position from NPC and left the party, citing the lack of a revolutionary platform for political reform of the local government in the northK.
Revised:  Borno Youth Movement In 1954, Ibrahim resigned his position from NPC and left the party, citing the lack of a revolutionary platform for political reform of the local government in the northK.
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Original:  The proposal was characterized as a temporary refuge for Jews to escape rising antisemitism in Europe.
Revised:  He presented it as a temporary refuge for Jews to escape rising antisemitism in Europe.
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Original:  The congress soundly rejected it .
Revised:  The congress soundly rejected the proposal .
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Original:  The Uganda Scheme was a proposal presented at the Sixth Zionist Congress in Basel in 1903 by Zionist visionary Theodor Herzl to create a Jewish homeland in a portion of British-controlled East Africa.
Revised:  The Uganda Scheme was a proposal presented at the Sixth Zionist Congress in Basel in 1903 by Zionism founder Theodor Herzl to create a Jewish homeland in a portion of British-controlled East Africa.
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Original:  The congress soundly rejected the proposal .
Revised:  At the congress the proposal met stiff resistance .
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Original: Herzl presented the plan at the Sixth Zionist Congress but it faced resistance from many of the 573 assembled delgates .
Revised: Herzl presented the plan at the Sixth Zionist Congress but it faced resistance from many of the 573 assembled delegates .
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Original:  The Uganda Proposal (sometimes called the "Uganda Scheme ) was presented at the Sixth Zionist Congress in Basel in 1903 by Zionism founder Theodor Herzl to create a Jewish homeland in a portion of British-controlled East Africa.
Revised:  The Uganda Scheme was a proposal presented at the Sixth Zionist Congress in Basel in 1903 by Zionism founder Theodor Herzl to create a Jewish homeland in a portion of British-controlled East Africa.
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Original:  In Lavie Tidhar' 2018 novel Unholy Land, a Jewish state called Palestina is established in Africa after the 1904 expedition returns a positive URL It was shortlisted for several awards, including the Sidewise Award for Alternate History, and builds on the author's earlier story, "Uganda".
Revised:  In Lavie Tidhar' 2018 novel Unholy Land, a Jewish state called Palestina is established in Africa after the 1904 expedition returns a positive report. It was shortlisted for several awards, including the Sidewise Award for Alternate History, and builds on the author's earlier story, "Uganda".
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Original:  The Uganda Scheme was a proposal presented at the Sixth World Zionist Congress in Basel in 1903 by Zionism founder Theodor Herzl to create a Jewish homeland in a portion of British-controlled East Africa.
Revised:  The Uganda Scheme was a proposal presented at the Sixth World Zionist Congress in Basel in 1903 by Zionism founder Theodor Herzl to create a Jewish homeland in a portion of British East Africa.
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Original: The Ant and Bee stories are a series of small-format hardback books written by Angela Banner (pseudonym of Angela Mary Maddison, born May 14, 1923 ;
Revised: The Ant and Bee stories are a series of small-format hardback books written by Angela Banner (pseudonym of Angela Mary Maddison, born 1923 ;
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Original: The Ant and Bee stories are a series of small-format hardback books written by Angela Banner (pseudonym of Angela Mary Maddison [nee Lincke], born May 14, 1923 , died May 30, 2014).
Revised: The Ant and Bee stories are a series of small-format hardback books written by Angela Banner (pseudonym of Angela Mary Maddison [nee Lincke], 1923 , died May 30, 2014).
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Original: The Ant and Bee stories are a series of small-format hardback books written by Angela Banner (pseudonym of Angela Mary Maddison [nee Lincke], born May 14, 1923 , died May 30, 2014).
Revised: The Ant and Bee stories are a series of small-format hardback books written by Angela Banner (pseudonym of Angela Mary Maddison [nee Lincke], born May 14, 1923 – 2014).
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Original:  The series The original series comprised thirteen volumes, listed below with the book number that was printed on the cover on some UK editions.
Revised:  Series The original series comprised thirteen volumes, listed below with the book number that was printed on the cover on some UK editions.
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Original: Hiresh Haridas ( ;
Revised: Hiresh Haridas ( 
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Original: 2003-2008 : Breakthrough Reshmonu released his debut album, Monumental, in 2003 under Dhanosh Records, after taking four years to URL Reshmonu tops AIM's list, The Star, 31 March 2004 The album impressed critics and fans with hit singles like Walk Away, Like This, Pirivu and It's You That Matters.
Revised: 2003–2008 : Breakthrough Reshmonu released his debut album, Monumental, in 2003 under Dhanosh Records, after taking four years to URL Reshmonu tops AIM's list, The Star, 31 March 2004 The album impressed critics and fans with hit singles like Walk Away, Like This, Pirivu and It's You That Matters.
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Original:  Reshmonu subsequently released a repackaged album under Sony BMG entitled “ Monumental – The Journey Continues ” in December 2004 which included Kiranya Tiada Lagi (the Malay version of Walk Away) and the chart toping hit Hey Waley.
Revised:  Reshmonu subsequently released a repackaged album under Sony BMG entitled " Monumental – The Journey Continues ” in December 2004 which included Kiranya Tiada Lagi (the Malay version of Walk Away) and the chart toping hit Hey Waley.
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Original:  Reshmonu subsequently released a repackaged album under Sony BMG entitled “ Monumental – The Journey Continues ” in December 2004 which included Kiranya Tiada Lagi (the Malay version of Walk Away) and the chart toping hit Hey Waley.
Revised:  Reshmonu subsequently released a repackaged album under Sony BMG entitled “ Monumental – The Journey Continues " in December 2004 which included Kiranya Tiada Lagi (the Malay version of Walk Away) and the chart toping hit Hey Waley.
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Original:  Universal Music Malaysia took an interest in Reshmonu and, in 2007, collaborated with him to release his third Malaysian English album entitled “Superfine” with a gala live outdoor concert at The Curve, Kota Damansara.
Revised:  Universal Music Malaysia took an interest in Reshmonu and, in 2007, collaborated with him to release his third Malaysian English album entitled "Superfine" with a gala live outdoor concert at The Curve, Kota Damansara.
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Original:  Among the singles from Superfine were Superfine (the title track) and The Way It Makes You Move. 2008-2013 Reshmonu made his directorial debut on his second music video for ‘The Way It Makes You Move’, the second single from the album ‘Superfine’.
Revised:  Among the singles from Superfine were Superfine (the title track) and The Way It Makes You Move. 2008–2013 Reshmonu made his directorial debut on his second music video for ‘The Way It Makes You Move’, the second single from the album ‘Superfine’.
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Original:  He then set up R Talents, which he is currently managing himself as well as artists such as Sports Announcer Roshan (Football Overload), TV Host & Radio personality Phat Fabes, Ashtaka, Beauty Queen, Nigerian Rapper - Young Stunna & Dj Nadine Ann Thomas and Indie Singer/Songwriter Ain Zulkifly.
Revised:  He then set up R Talents, which he is currently managing himself as well as artists such as Sports Announcer Roshan (Football Overload), TV Host & Radio personality Phat Fabes, Ashtaka, Beauty Queen, Nigerian Rapper – Young Stunna & Dj Nadine Ann Thomas and Indie Singer/Songwriter Ain Zulkifly.
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Original:  He then set up R Talents, which he is currently managing himself as well as artists such as Sports Announcer Roshan (Football Overload), TV Host & Radio personality Phat Fabes, Ashtaka, Beauty Queen, Nigerian Rapper - Young Stunna & Dj Nadine Ann Thomas and Indie Singer/Songwriter Ain Zulkifly.
Revised:  He then set up R Talents, which he is currently managing himself as well as artists such as Sports Announcer Roshan (Football Overload), TV Host & Radio personality Phat Fabes, Ashtaka, Beauty Queen, Nigerian Rapper - Young Stunna & Dj Nadine Ann Thomas and Indie Singer-Songwriter Ain Zulkifly.
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Original:  The track shot up to  1 on Hitz FM's Malaysian English Top 10 (or MET10) charts within its first week of URL Anugerah Industri Muzik Awarded Best Engineered Album for ‘Harapan’ at the 16th Anugerah Industri Muzik Awards Malaysia 2009 held at The Putra World Trade Centre on 2 May 2009.
Revised:  The track shot up to No. 1 on Hitz FM's Malaysian English Top 10 (or MET10) charts within its first week of URL Anugerah Industri Muzik Awarded Best Engineered Album for ‘Harapan’ at the 16th Anugerah Industri Muzik Awards Malaysia 2009 held at The Putra World Trade Centre on 2 May 2009.
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