wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  She played for the Cook Islands at the 2017 Women's Rugby League World URL  Category:1991 births Category:Living people Category:New Zealand female rugby union players Category:New Zealand international rugby union players Category:New Zealand Māori rugby union players Category:New Zealand female rugby league players Category: Cook Island rugby league players Category:New Zealand people of Cook Island descent Category:Rugby league hookers  Category:Rugby union hooke
Revised:  She played for the Cook Islands at the 2017 Women's Rugby League World URL Category:1991 births Category:Living people Category:New Zealand female rugby union players Category:New Zealand international rugby union players Category:New Zealand Māori rugby union players Category:New Zealand female rugby league players Category: Cook Island rugby league players Category:New Zealand people of Cook Island descent Category:Rugby league hookers Category:Rugby league locks Category:Rugby union hooke
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Original: Background ++The Peru-Bolivian Confederation was a plan that attempted to reunite the Alto Perú ("Upper Peru", now Bolivia) and Bajo Perú ("Lower Peru", now simply Peru) into a single political and economic entity.
Revised: Background he Peru-Bolivian Confederation was a plan that attempted to reunite the Alto Perú ("Upper Peru", now Bolivia) and Bajo Perú ("Lower Peru", now simply Peru) into a single political and economic entity.
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Original:  Marshal Andrés de Santa Cruz promoted an ambitious project to reunite these two territories on the basis of a confederacy.
Revised:  Marshal Andrés de Santa Cruz promoted an ambitious project to reunite the two territories on the basis of a confederacy.
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Original:  This integration was based not only on historical, cultural  and ethnic reasons but also on sound economic motives.
Revised:  The integration was based not only on historical, cultural and ethnic reasons but also on sound economic motives.
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Original:  This integration was based not only on historical, cultural  and ethnic reasons but also on sound economic motives.
Revised:  This integration was based not only on historical, cultural , and ethnic reasons but also on sound economic motives.
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Original:  With Bolivian help, General Orbegoso quickly regained his leadership throughout the country and had Salaverry summarily executed.
Revised:  With Bolivian help, Orbegoso quickly regained his leadership throughout the country and had Salaverry summarily executed.
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Original:  Santa Cruz assumed the Supreme Protectorship of the confederation  and Orbegoso maintained only the presidency of the newly created Republic of North Peru.
Revised:  Santa Cruz assumed the Supreme Protectorship of the confederation , and Orbegoso maintained only the presidency of the newly created Republic of North Peru.
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Original:  Santa Cruz assumed the Supreme Protectorship of the confederation  and Orbegoso maintained only the presidency of the newly created Republic of North Peru.
Revised:  Santa Cruz assumed the Supreme Protectorship of the confederation and Orbegoso maintained only the presidency of the newly-created Republic of North Peru.
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Original: Creation At the instigation of Santa Cruz, a Congress of the Peruvian southern departments (Arequipa, Ayacucho, Cuzco  and Puno) gathered at Sicuani and declared the establishment of South Peru (March 17, 1836.)
Revised: Creation At the instigation of Santa Cruz, a Congress of the Peruvian southern departments (Arequipa, Ayacucho, Cuzco , and Puno) gathered at Sicuani and declared the establishment of South Peru (March 17, 1836.)
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Original:  Then, together with North Peru, they recognized Santa Cruz as Supreme Protector with extensive powers that enabled him to create the Peru-Bolivian Confederation on October 28, 1836.
Revised:  Together with North Peru, they recognized Santa Cruz as Supreme Protector with extensive powers that enabled him to create the Peru-Bolivian Confederation on October 28, 1836.
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Original:  Under his direction, they signed a pact on May 1, 1837, which named him Supreme Protector for a ten-year period .
Revised:  Under his direction, they signed a pact on May 1, 1837, which named him Supreme Protector for ten years .
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Original: ]] There was, from 1837 until the dissolution , a Provisional President and a Congress, both with limited powers and under the control of Marshal Andrés de Santa Cruz  who was styled the Supreme Protector.
Revised: ]] From 1837 until the dissolution , a Provisional President and a Congress, both with limited powers and under the control of Marshal Andrés de Santa Cruz who was styled the Supreme Protector.
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Original: ]] There was, from 1837 until the dissolution , a Provisional President and a Congress, both with limited powers and under the control of Marshal Andrés de Santa Cruz  who was styled the Supreme Protector.
Revised: ]] There was, from 1837 to its dissolution were a Provisional President and a Congress, both with limited powers and under the control of Marshal Andrés de Santa Cruz who was styled the Supreme Protector.
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Original: ]] There was, from 1837 until the dissolution , a Provisional President and a Congress, both with limited powers and under the control of Marshal Andrés de Santa Cruz  who was styled the Supreme Protector.
Revised: ]] There was, from 1837 until the dissolution , a Provisional President and a Congress, both with limited powers and under the control of Marshal Andrés de Santa Cruz , who was styled the Supreme Protector.
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Original:  He issued a civil code, a penal code, a trade regulation, a customs regulation and reorganized tax collectionprocedures allowing an increase in state revenues while restraining expenditures.
Revised:  He issued a civil code, a penal code, a trade regulation, a customs regulation and procedures for reorganizing tax collection, which allowed an increase in state revenues while restraining expenditures.
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Original:  He issued a civil code, a penal code, a trade regulation, a customs regulation and reorganized tax collectionprocedures allowing an increase in state revenues while restraining expenditures.
Revised:  He issued a civil code, a penal code, a trade regulation, a customs regulation and reorganized tax collectionprocedures allowing an increase in state revenues and reduced expenditures.
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Original:  However, the Confederation generated resistances among several groups in both countries , which resented the dilution of national identities , and also among neighbouring countries.
Revised:  However, the Confederation generated resistances among several groups in both countries that resented the dilution of national identities , and also among neighbouring countries.
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Original:  The Chilean government then organized a second expedition, which defeated the Supreme Protector at the Battle of Yungay on January 20, 1839 , and forced the dissolution of the Confederation.
Revised:  The Chilean government then organized a second expedition, which defeated the Supreme Protector at the Battle of Yungay on January 20, 1839 and forced the dissolution of the Confederation.
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Original:  When Agustín Gamarra took office as the new president of Peru on August 25, 1839, he officially declared the dissolution of the Confederation and of the merging of the Northern and Southern Peruvian Republics into a single state to be called again Peru and separate from Bolivia
Revised:  When Agustín Gamarra took office as the new president of Peru on August 25, 1839, he officially declared the dissolution of the Confederation and of the merging of the Northern and Southern Peruvian Republics into a single state , again called Peru, and separate from Bolivia
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Original: Background he Peru-Bolivian Confederation was a plan that attempted to reunite the Alto Perú ("Upper Peru", now Bolivia) and Bajo Perú ("Lower Peru", now simply Peru) into a single political and economic entity.
Revised: Background The Peru-Bolivian Confederation was a plan that attempted to reunite the Alto Perú ("Upper Peru", now Bolivia) and Bajo Perú ("Lower Peru", now simply Peru) into a single political and economic entity.
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Original:  Arequipa Department Ayacucho Department Cuzco Department Litoral Department Puno Department Peru–Bolivian Confederation Category:Peru–Bolivian Confederation
Revised:  Arequipa Department Ayacucho Department Cuzco Department Litoral Department Puno Department 
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Original:  as a result, South Peru and North Peru reverted to being the single Republic of Peru.
Revised:  as a result, South Peru and North Peru reverted to being a unified Republic of Peru.
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Original:  Battaglia, D., Landoni, P., Rizzitelli, F. (2017).
Revised:  Rizzitelli, F. (2017).
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Original:  It was also represented in the Imperial Legislative Council and the Central Legislative Assembly . After the Government of Burma Act, 1935 separated Burma from India, the Legislature of Burma served  the legislative body of the colony, including Arakan Division.
Revised:  It was also represented in the Imperial Legislative Council . After the Government of Burma Act, 1935 separated Burma from India, the Legislature of Burma served the legislative body of the colony, including Arakan Division.
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Original:  It was also represented in the Imperial Legislative Council and the Central Legislative Assembly . After the Government of Burma Act, 1935 separated Burma from India, the Legislature of Burma served  the legislative body of the colony, including Arakan Division.
Revised:  It was also represented in the Imperial Legislative Council and the Central Legislative Assembly . After the Government of Burma Act, 1935 separated Burma from India, the Legislature of Burma served as the legislative body of the colony, including Arakan Division.
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Original:  If adequate safeguards were not possible, then a separate northern Arakan zone should  administered directly from the national capital URL
Revised:  If adequate safeguards were not possible, then a separate northern Arakan zone should be administered directly from the national capital URL
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Original:  Mahmud submitted his proposal to the Statehood Consultative URL Mahmud said that Arakanese Indians would accept a joint state with Arakanese Buddhists if there was adequate protection and representation of the Indian minority.
Revised:  Mahmud submitted his proposal to the Statehood Consultative Committee. Mahmud said that Arakanese Indians would accept a joint state with Arakanese Buddhists if there was adequate protection and representation of the Indian minority.
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Original:  If adequate safeguards were not possible, Mahmud proposed that a separate northern Arakan zone should be administered directly from the national capital URL Dissolution The Burmese military ended the special status of the district in February URL The Mayu Frontier area was placed under the responsibility of the Ministry of Home Affairs.
Revised:  If adequate safeguards were not possible, Mahmud proposed that a separate northern Arakan zone should be administered directly from the national capital Rangoon. Dissolution The Burmese military ended the special status of the district in February URL The Mayu Frontier area was placed under the responsibility of the Ministry of Home Affairs.
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Original: Map of Rakhine State with the Mayu Frontier District highlighted in red.
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Original: Steatosis, also called fatty change, is the process describing the abnormal retention of lipids within a cell or organ.
Revised: Steatosis, also called fatty change, is abnormal retention of lipids within a cell or organ.
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Original: Steatosis, also called fatty change, is the process describing the abnormal retention of lipids within a cell or organ.
Revised: Steatosis, also called fatty change, is the process describing the abnormal retention of fat (lipids) within a cell or organ.
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Original:  When not further specified ( such ascardiac steatosis ), it is defined as affecting the liver.
Revised:  When not further specified ( as, for example, in 'cardiac steatosis' ), it is defined as affecting the liver.
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Original:  When not further specified ( such ascardiac steatosis ), it is defined as affecting the liver.
Revised:  When not further specified ( such ascardiac steatosis ), it is assumed to refer to the liver.
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Original:  While not particularly detrimental to the cell in mild cases, large accumulations can disrupt cell constituents, and in severe cases the cell may even burst .
Revised:  While not particularly detrimental to the cell in mild cases, large accumulations can disrupt cell constituents, and in severe cases the cell may even burst 
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Original:  Steatosis most often affects the liver – the primary organ of fat metabolism – where it is commonly referred to as fatty liver disease.
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Original:  Steatosis most often affects the liver ( the primary organ of lipid metabolism) , where the condition is commonly referred to as fatty liver disease.
Revised:  Steatosis most often affects the liver – the primary organ of lipid metabolism) , where the condition is commonly referred to as fatty liver disease.
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Original:  Steatosis most often affects the liver ( the primary organ of lipid metabolism) , where the condition is commonly referred to as fatty liver disease.
Revised:  Steatosis most often affects the liver ( the primary organ of lipid metabolism) – where the condition is commonly referred to as fatty liver disease.
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Original:  Steatosis most often affects the liver – the primary organ of lipid metabolism ) – where the condition is commonly referred to as fatty liver disease.
Revised:  Steatosis most often affects the liver – the primary organ of lipid metabolism – where the condition is commonly referred to as fatty liver disease.
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Original: On Magnetic Resonance Imaging , multiecho gradient echo images can be used to determine the percent fat fraction of the liver.
Revised: On magnetic resonance imaging , multiecho gradient echo images can be used to determine the percent fat fraction of the liver.
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Original:  Nutrient malnutrition may also cause the mobilisation of fat from adipocytes and create a local oversupply in the liver where  lipid metabolism occurs.
Revised:  Nutrient malnutrition may also cause the mobilisation of fat from adipocytes and create a local oversupply in the liver where damn lipid metabolism occurs.
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Original:  In 1903, Chen and two brothers, Gao Jianfu and Gao Qifeng  co-founded the Guangdong Daily.
Revised:  In 1903, Chen and two brothers, Gao Jianfu and Gao Qifeng , co-founded the Guangdong Daily.
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Original:  Born Chen Zhe (), he was renamed Chen Shao (  and also known by the art names De'an Laoren (), Jiawai Yuzi (), and Ershan Shanqiao (), among others.
Revised:  Born Chen Zhe (), he was renamed Chen Shao ( ) and also known by the art names De'an Laoren (), Jiawai Yuzi (), and Ershan Shanqiao (), among others.
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Original:  Afterward, he withdrew support from Wang's Japan-friendly collaborationist government, and from 1932 to 1947,  led the Overseas Chinese Affairs Commission. 
Revised:  From 1932 to 1947, led the Overseas Chinese Affairs Commission. 
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Original: Calgary Stampede Calf Robe liaised with Calgary Stampede founder Guy Weadick on the inagural event in 1912, and was invited to camp at the Indian Village.
Revised: Calgary Stampede Calf Robe liaised with Calgary Stampede founder Guy Weadick on the inaugural event in 1912, and was invited to camp at the Indian Village.
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Original:  Ben Calf Robe - St. Clare, an elementary & junior high URL in Edmonton, Alberta Ben Calf Robe Annual Traditional Pow wow, a social gathering held in the springtime in Edmonton, Alberta since 1981 Calf Robe Bridge, a Bow River crossing in Calgary, Alberta
Revised:  Ben Calf Robe - St. Clare, an elementary & junior high school in Edmonton, Alberta Ben Calf Robe Annual Traditional Pow wow, a social gathering held in the springtime in Edmonton, Alberta since 1981 Calf Robe Bridge, a Bow River crossing in Calgary, Alberta
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Original:  During his tenure at NSE, the shares of stock  were demutualised and sold to the public.
Revised:  During his tenure at NSE, the shares of stock of the exchange, were demutualised and sold to the public.
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Original: Structures In the literature, 31P-NMR spectra of phosphirenium ions show upfield shifts (-57.3 ppm when R1 = R2 = Y1 = CH3, Y2 = Cl).
Revised: Characterizations In the literature, 31P-NMR spectra of phosphirenium ions show upfield shifts (-57.3 ppm when R1 = R2 = Y1 = CH3, Y2 = Cl).
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Original:  Reactions Reminiscent of pi-ligand exchange in coordination compounds, a phosphirenium ion may undergo alkyne exchange with other alkynes to give a mixture of phospinirenium species in equilibrium.
Revised:  Reactivity Reminiscent of π-ligand exchange in coordination compounds, a phosphirenium ion may undergo alkyne exchange with other alkynes to give a mixture of phospinirenium species in equilibrium.
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Original:  Kinetically, elimination of alkyne from the cation is suggested to be rate-determining step. center|frameless| 317x317px Electrophilic B(C6F5)3 readily reacts with phosphinylalkynes at room temperature to give phosphirenium-borate zwitterions as intermediates, which then generate carbon-phosphorus sigma bond activation products at higher temperature.
Revised:  Kinetically, elimination of alkyne from the cation is suggested to be rate-determining step. center|frameless| 317x317px Electrophilic B(C6F5)3 readily reacts with phosphinylalkynes at room temperature to give phosphirenium-borate zwitterions as intermediates, which then generate carbon-phosphorus σ bond activation products at higher temperature.
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Original:  Dotted line in No. xx indicates week interaction between boron and phosphor atoms (  frustrated Lewis pair). center|frameless| 400x400px Electronegativity of each substituent on phosphorus plays a role as more electron-donating ones give greater degrees of antiaromatic sigma destabilization.
Revised:  Dotted line in No. xx indicates week interaction between boron and phosphor atoms ( see frustrated Lewis pair). center|frameless| 400x400px Electronegativity of each substituent on phosphorus plays a role as more electron-donating ones give greater degrees of antiaromatic sigma destabilization.
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Original:  This has been confirmed by Natural Population Analysis (NPA), where the energy changes of the reactions below were calculated with interactions between C-C double bond and P both turned on and off by manipulating Fock-matrix elements: center|frameless|315x315px  Destabilization energies were the differences between corresponding reactions . Destabilization Energy = Energy (1) -
Revised:  This has been confirmed by Natural Population Analysis (NPA), where the energy changes of the reactions below were calculated with interactions between C-C double bond and P both turned on and off by manipulating Fock-matrix elements: center|frameless|315x315px Destabilization energies were the differences between corresponding reactions : Destabilization Energy = Energy (1) -
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Original:  Energy (2) Destabilization Energy with different Y groups: Y = F > OH > Cl > NH2 > Br > I > CH3 > H This series is in accordance with the trend of electronegativity of the ligand atoms   .
Revised:  Energy (2) Destabilization Energy with different Y groups: Y = F > OH > Cl > NH2 > Br > I > CH3 > H This series is in accordance with the trend of electronegativity of the ligand atoms . .
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Original:  |200x200px Phosphirenium ions ( R1R2C2PY1Y2+ ) are a series of organophosphorus compounds containing unsaturated three-membered ring P (V) -heterocycles and σ*-aromaticity is believed to be present in such molecules.
Revised:  |200x200px Phosphirenium ions ( ) are a series of organophosphorus compounds containing unsaturated three-membered ring P (V) -heterocycles and σ*-aromaticity is believed to be present in such molecules.
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Original:  |200x200px Phosphirenium ions ( R1R2C2PY1Y2+ ) are a series of organophosphorus compounds containing unsaturated three-membered ring P (V) -heterocycles and σ*-aromaticity is believed to be present in such molecules.
Revised:  |200x200px Phosphirenium ions ( R1R2C2PY1Y2+ ) are a series of organophosphorus compounds containing unsaturated three-membered ring phosphorus (V) -heterocycles and σ*-aromaticity is believed to be present in such molecules.
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Original:  |200x200px Phosphirenium ions ( R1R2C2PY1Y2+ ) are a series of organophosphorus compounds containing unsaturated three-membered ring P (V) -heterocycles and σ*-aromaticity is believed to be present in such molecules.
Revised:  |200x200px Phosphirenium ions ( R1R2C2PY1Y2+ ) are a series of organophosphorus compounds containing unsaturated three-membered ring P (V) heterocycles and σ*-aromaticity is believed to be present in such molecules.
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Original:  Synthesis The first series of phosphirenium ions were synthesized by reacting alkynes with methyl- or phenylphosphonous dichloride / aluminum trichloride.
Revised:  Synthesis The first series of phosphirenium ions were synthesized by reacting alkynes with methyl- or phenylphosphonous dichloride and aluminum trichloride.
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Original:  These reactions may be regarded as formal addition of "RClP+" to alkynes. center|frameless|334x334px Characterizations In the literature, 31P-NMR spectra of phosphirenium ions show upfield shifts ( -57.3 ppm when R1 = R2 = Y1 = CH3, Y2 = Cl).
Revised:  These reactions may be regarded as formal addition of "RClP+" to alkynes. center|frameless|334x334px Characterizations In the literature, 31P NMR spectra of phosphirenium ions show upfield shifts ( -57.3 ppm when R1 = R2 = Y1 = CH3, Y2 = Cl).
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Original:  These reactions may be regarded as formal addition of "RClP+" to alkynes. center|frameless|334x334px Characterizations In the literature, 31P-NMR spectra of phosphirenium ions show upfield shifts ( -57.3 ppm when R1 = R2 = Y1 = CH3, Y2 = Cl).
Revised:  These reactions may be regarded as formal addition of "RClP+" to alkynes. center|frameless|334x334px Characterizations In the literature, 31P-NMR spectra of phosphirenium ions show upfield shifts ( −57.3 ppm when R1 = R2 = Y1 = CH3, Y2 = Cl).
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Original:  Large coupling constants J are also found in 1H-NMR , and are comparable to those found in cyclopropenium ions.
Revised:  Large coupling constants J are also found in 1H NMR , and are comparable to those found in cyclopropenium ions.
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Original:  The first phosphirenium ion characterized by X-ray Crystallography has the following structural formula: center|frameless|106x106px In the refined crystal structure, average phosphorus-cyclic carbon distance has been found to be 1.731(12) Å, roughly corresponding to a bond order of 1.5.
Revised:  The first phosphirenium ion characterized by X-ray Crystallography has the following structural formula: center|frameless|106x106px In the refined crystal structure, average phosphorus–cyclic carbon distance has been found to be 1.731(12) Å, roughly corresponding to a bond order of 1.5.
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Original:  For comparison, typical single and double bond P-C distances are 1.86 Å and 1.68 Å, respectively.
Revised:  For comparison, typical single- and double-bond P–C distances are 1.86 Å and 1.68 Å, respectively.
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