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Original:   Reportedly, 8 apartment units were totally destroyed .
Revised:  One witness told a local news agency: "It engulfed it pretty quick. It's amazing to see how quick a fire can go like that. It just started on one end and took over." Reportedly, 8 apartment units were totally destroyed .
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Original:   Reportedly, 8 apartment units were totally destroyed .
Revised:  8 apartment units were totally destroyed .
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Original:   Reportedly, 8 apartment units were totally destroyed .
Revised:  Reportedly, 8 apartment units were reportedly totally destroyed in the incident .
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Original:  Although zookeepers claim 'Charlie' died of old age - an autopsy has yet to confirm this claim  
Revised:  Although zookeepers claim 'Charlie' died of old age - an autopsy has yet to confirm this claim . 
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Original: After a video of 'Charlie' puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors to the zoo, leaked onto the internet - the chimp and the zoo gained international attention and even inspired some visitors to through him additional cigars.
Revised: After a video of 'Charlie' puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors to the zoo, leaked onto the internet - the chimp and the zoo gained international attention and even inspired some visitors to throw him additional cigars.
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Original: 'Charlie', a Chimpanzee of a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes has died at the ripe old age of 52, superceding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by 12 years.
Revised: 'Charlie', a Chimpanzee in a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes has died at the ripe old age of 52, superceding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by 12 years.
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Original: 'Charlie', a Chimpanzee of a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes has died at the ripe old age of 52, superceding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by 12 years.
Revised: 'Charlie', a Chimpanzee of a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes has died at the age of 52, superceding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by 12 years.
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Original: 'Charlie', a Chimpanzee of a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes has died at the ripe old age of 52, superceding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by 12 years.
Revised: 'Charlie', a Chimpanzee of a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes has died at the ripe old age of 52, exceeding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by 12 years.
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Original: 'Charlie', a Chimpanzee of a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes has died at the ripe old age of 52, superceding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by 12 years.
Revised: 'Charlie', a Chimpanzee of a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes has died at the ripe old age of 52, superceding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by twelve years.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  After a video of 'Charlie' puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors to the zoo, leaked onto the internet - the chimp and the zoo gained international attention and even inspired some visitors to throw him additional cigars.
Revised:  After a video of 'Charlie' puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors appeared on the internet, the chimp and the zoo gained international attention and even inspired some visitors to throw him additional cigars.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  After a video of 'Charlie' puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors to the zoo, leaked onto the internet - the chimp and the zoo gained international attention and even inspired some visitors to throw him additional cigars.
Revised:  After a video of 'Charlie' puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors to the zoo, leaked onto the internet - the chimp and the zoo gained international attention and some visitors threw him additional cigars.
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Original:  Although zookeepers claim 'Charlie' died of old age - an autopsy has yet to confirm this claim .
Revised:  Zookeepers say that 'Charlie' died of old age - an autopsy has yet to confirm this claim .
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Original:  Although zookeepers claim 'Charlie' died of old age - an autopsy has yet to confirm this claim .
Revised:  Although zookeepers claim 'Charlie' died of old age but an autopsy has yet to confirm this claim .
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Original:  Although zookeepers claim 'Charlie' died of old age - an autopsy has yet to confirm this claim .
Revised:  Although zookeepers claim 'Charlie' died of old age - an autopsy has yet to confirm this .
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Original: 'Charlie' , a Chimpanzee in a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes  has died at the age of 52, exceeding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by twelve years.
Revised: Charlie , a Chimpanzee in a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes has died at the age of 52, exceeding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by twelve years.
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Original: 'Charlie' , a Chimpanzee in a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes  has died at the age of 52, exceeding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by twelve years.
Revised: 'Charlie' , a Chimpanzee in a South African zoo, who became addicted to cigarettes , has died at the age of 52, exceeding the average lifespan of a captive chimpanzee by twelve years.
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Original:  After a video of 'Charlie ' puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors appeared on the internet, the chimp and the zoo gained international attention and some visitors threw him additional cigars.
Revised:  After a video of Charlie puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors appeared on the internet, the chimp and the zoo gained international attention and some visitors threw him additional cigars.
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Original:  After a video of 'Charlie ' puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors appeared on the internet, the chimp and the zoo gained international attention and some visitors threw him additional cigars.
Revised:  After a video of 'Charlie ' puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors appeared on the internet, the animal and the zoo gained international attention and some visitors threw him additional cigars.
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Original:  According to his keepers, 'Charlie ' was "an occasional smoker" and even tried to hide his habit from his keepers, who were trying to get him to quit 'cold-turkey'.
Revised:  According to his keepers, Charlie was "an occasional smoker" and even tried to hide his habit from his keepers, who were trying to get him to quit 'cold-turkey'.
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Original:  It is believed that 'Charlie ' learnt to smoke during his time in a circus  . Zookeepers say that 'Charlie' died of old age but an autopsy has yet to confirm this.
Revised:  It is believed that Charlie learned to smoke during his time in a circus . Zookeepers say that 'Charlie' died of old age but an autopsy has yet to confirm this.
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Original:  It is believed that 'Charlie ' learnt to smoke during his time in a circus  . Zookeepers say that 'Charlie' died of old age but an autopsy has yet to confirm this.
Revised:  It is believed that 'Charlie ' learnt to smoke during his time in a circus . Zookeepers say that the animal died of old age but an autopsy has yet to confirm this.
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Original:  It was suggested by the zoo that 'Charlie' could be stuffed and become a permanent feature
Revised:  The zoo suggested that Charlie's body could be stuffed and become a permanent feature
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Original:  It was suggested by the zoo that 'Charlie' could be stuffed and become a permanent feature
Revised:  It was suggested by the zoo that 'Charlie' could be stuffed and put on display
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Original:  After a video of Charlie puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors appeared on the internet, the animal and the zoo gained international attention and some visitors threw him additional cigars .
Revised:  After a video of Charlie puffing on cigarettes discarded by visitors appeared on the internet, the animal and the zoo gained international attention and some visitors threw him additional cigarettes .
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Original: After 27 years, the Australian Dollar has achieved a record high by equating to 98.73 US cents.
Revised: After 27 years, the Australian Dollar has achieved a record high by equating to 98.73 U.S. cents.
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Original:  The previous record was set in 1983, when the Australian Dollar was floated by foreign exchange markets - since then the last peak that it experienced was in July , 2008  when it was worth 98.49  cents.
Revised:  The previous record was set in 1983, when the currency was floated by foreign exchange markets - since then the last peak that it experienced was in July , 2008 when it was worth 98.49 cents.
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Original:  The previous record was set in 1983, when the Australian Dollar was floated by foreign exchange markets - since then the last peak that it experienced was in July , 2008  when it was worth 98.49  cents.
Revised:  The previous record was set in 1983, when the Australian Dollar was floated by foreign exchange markets — since then the last peak that it experienced was in July , 2008 when it was worth 98.49 cents.
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Original:  The previous record was set in 1983, when the Australian Dollar was floated by foreign exchange markets - since then the last peak that it experienced was in July , 2008  when it was worth 98.49  cents.
Revised:  The previous record was set in 1983, when the Australian Dollar was floated by foreign exchange markets - since then the last peak that it experienced was in July 2008 when it was worth 98.49 cents.
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Original:  The previous record was set in 1983, when the Australian Dollar was floated by foreign exchange markets - since then the last peak that it experienced was in July , 2008  when it was worth 98.49  cents.
Revised:  The previous record was set in 1983, when the Australian Dollar was floated by foreign exchange markets - since then the last peak that it experienced was in July , 2008 , when it was worth 98.49 cents.
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Original:  Local economist believe this is a clear indication that interest rates will rise in the near future.
Revised:  Local economists believe this is a clear indication that interest rates will rise in the near future.
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Original:   Minister for Jobs, Chris Evans  has attributed the spike in the Australian dollar to government stimulus rolled out at the crux of The GFC, of which Australia exited relatively unscathed.
Revised:  Minister for Jobs, Chris Evans , has attributed the spike in the Australian dollar to government stimulus rolled out at the crux of The GFC, of which Australia exited relatively unscathed.
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Original:  This news comes as the Australian Bureau of Statistics released a report stating that Australian unemployment was set a 5.1 per cent after additional jobs were gained in previous months , and as Forbes magazine names Australian businessperson and CEO of Westpac, Gail kelly as the eighth most powerful woman in the world
Revised:  The news comes as the Australian Bureau of Statistics released a report stating that Australian unemployment was set a 5.1 per cent after additional jobs were gained in previous months , and as Forbes magazine names Australian businessperson and CEO of Westpac, Gail kelly as the eighth most powerful woman in the world
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Original:  This news comes as the Australian Bureau of Statistics released a report stating that Australian unemployment was set a 5.1 per cent after additional jobs were gained in previous months , and as Forbes magazine names Australian businessperson and CEO of Westpac, Gail kelly as the eighth most powerful woman in the world
Revised:  This news comes as the Australian Bureau of Statistics released a report stating that Australian unemployment was set a 5.1 per cent after additional jobs were gained in previous months , and as Forbes magazine names Australian businessperson and CEO of Westpac, Gail Kelly, as the eighth most powerful woman in the world
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Original:  American magazine Forbes magazine  named Australian businessperson and CEO of Westpac, Gail Kelly, as the eighth most powerful woman in the world
Revised:  American magazine Forbes magazine recently named Australian businessperson and CEO of Westpac, Gail Kelly, as the eighth most powerful woman in the world
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Original:  Bodies rescued were of children from 5-15 yrs old. rescue efforts are on
Revised:  Bodies rescued were of children from 5-15 yrs old. Rescue efforts are on
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Original:  Reportedly, many residents of this region rely heavily on poorly-maintained river ferries for transportation.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Irrawaddyrivermap.jpg|A view of the Irrawaddy river.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% 
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Original:   A rescue worker told that there was heavy rain around 10 AM , when the ferry struck a strong wave and sank.
Revised:  A rescue worker suggested that there had been heavy rain around 10 AM , when the ferry struck a strong wave and sank.
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Original:   A rescue worker told that there was heavy rain around 10 AM , when the ferry struck a strong wave and sank.
Revised:  A rescue worker told that there was heavy rain around 10 a.m. , when the ferry struck a strong wave and sank.
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Original:   On why she suddenly feels comfortable on publicly coming out, confirming what has been known for many months , "I was thinking, well, the people who need to know I'm gay know, and I'm somehow living by example by continuing on with my career and having a full, rich life, and I am incidentally gay, but it's not a big political platform.
Revised:  On why she suddenly feels comfortable on publicly speaking on the topic , "I was thinking, well, the people who need to know I'm gay know, and I'm somehow living by example by continuing on with my career and having a full, rich life, and I am incidentally gay, but it's not a big political platform.
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Original: The 32-year-old Australian lesbian reveals she recently told her 98-year-old grandmother that she was a lesbian, when visiting back home.
Revised: The 32-year-old Australian reveals she recently told her 98-year-old grandmother that she was a lesbian, when visiting back home.
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Original:  Supposedly her grandmother had a change of heart after two-minutes , accepting De Rossi's sexuality.
Revised:  Supposedly her grandmother had a change of heart after two minutes , accepting De Rossi's sexuality.
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Original: Mohammad Omar, Afghan governor of the German-garrisoned province of Kunduz, was killed by a bomb attack in a mosque, attending Friday prayers in Taloqan, capital of neighbouring Takhar province — as said by Faiz Mohammad Tauhidi, spokesman for the governor of Takhar.
Revised: Mohammad Omar, Afghan governor of the German-garrisoned province of Kunduz, was killed by a bomb attack in a mosque, attending Friday prayers in Taloqan, capital of neighbouring Takhar province ; as said by Faiz Mohammad Tauhidi, spokesman for the governor of Takhar.
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Original:  His brother was assassinated last year by the Taliban and attempts had been made on his life three times .
Revised:  His brother was assassinated last year by the Talibans .
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Original:  Abdul Jabar Taqwa, governor of Takhar, was very sorry and saidin sorrow : "He was the target, and the terrorists were able to kill him.
Revised:  Abdul Jabar Taqwa, governor of Takhar, was very sorry ; he said : "He was the target, and the terrorists were able to kill him.
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Original:  Now, in the investigating matter the NATO-led International Security Assistance Force(ISAF) has said that they were much aware but now they have no additional information.
Revised:  The NATO-led International Security Assistance Force(ISAF) has said that they were much aware but now they have no additional information.
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Original:   Shah Jahan Noori agreed that the governor was the actual and the prime target of the attack.
Revised:  Provincial Security chief Shah Jahan Noori agreed that the governor was the actual and the prime target of the attack.
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Original: Mohammad Omar, Afghan governor of the German-garrisoned province of Kunduz,  was killed by a bomb attack in the Shirkat mosque , attending Friday prayers in Taloqan , capital of neighbouring Takhar province;
Revised: A governor of the German-garrisoned province of Kunduz, was killed by a bomb attack in the Shirkat mosque , attending Friday prayers in Taloqan , capital of neighbouring Takhar province;
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Original: Mohammad Omar, Afghan governor of the German-garrisoned province of Kunduz,  was killed by a bomb attack in the Shirkat mosque , attending Friday prayers in Taloqan , capital of neighbouring Takhar province;
Revised: Mohammad Omar, Afghan governor of the German-garrisoned province of Kunduz, Afghanistan, was killed by a bomb attack in the Shirkat mosque , attending Friday prayers in Taloqan , capital of neighbouring Takhar province;
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Original: Mohammad Omar, Afghan governor of the German-garrisoned province of Kunduz,  was killed by a bomb attack in the Shirkat mosque , attending Friday prayers in Taloqan , capital of neighbouring Takhar province;
Revised: Mohammad Omar, Afghan governor of the German-garrisoned province of Kunduz, was killed by a bomb attack in a mosque while attenting Friday prayers in Taloqan , capital of neighbouring Takhar province;
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Original:  as said by Faiz Mohammad Tauhidi,  spokesman for the governor of Takhar  .
Revised:  as said by Faiz Mohammad Tauhidi, a spokesman for the governor of Takhar .
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Original:  Over 33 were admitted in hospitals, with serious injuries.
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Original:  He came from the Takhar province, and also had close relationships with President Hamid Karzai.
Revised:  He came from the Takhar province, and as a politician had close relationships with President Hamid Karzai.
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Original:  He came from the Takhar province, and also had close relationships with President Hamid Karzai.
Revised:  He came from the Takhar province, and also had close relationships with the President of Afghanistan, Hamid Karzai.
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Original:   Also Omar had said to increase national security against Talibans last week.
Revised:  Three attempts have previously been made on his life, and his brother was assassinated last year by the Taliban. Also Omar had said to increase national security against Talibans last week.
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Original:  Briefly about his past, Mohammad Omar served as the mayor of Taloqan from 1991 to 1992.
Revised:  Briefly about his past, Mohammad Omar served as the mayor of Taloqan between 1991 to 1992.
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Original:  The NATO-led International Security Assistance Force (ISAF) has said that they were much aware but now they have no additional information . Provincial Security chief Shah Jahan Noori agreed that the governor was the actual and the prime target of the attack.
Revised:  The NATO-led International Security Assistance Force said they were aware of the attack, but did not comment further . Provincial Security chief Shah Jahan Noori agreed that the governor was the actual and the prime target of the attack.
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Original:  The NATO-led International Security Assistance Force (ISAF) has said that they were much aware but now they have no additional information . Provincial Security chief Shah Jahan Noori agreed that the governor was the actual and the prime target of the attack.
Revised:  The NATO-led International Security Assistance Force (ISAF) has said that they were much aware but now they have no additional information . Provincial Security chief Shah Jahan Noori agreed that the governor was the main target of the attack.
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Original:  It isn't confirmed if the bomb was already planted in the mosque or just a suicide bomber had attacked . "The situation is chaos, we do not know whether it was a suicide attack or whether the bomb was already planted in the mosque  " 
Revised:  It isn't confirmed if the bomb was already planted in the mosque or just a suicide bomber . "The situation is chaos, we do not know whether it was a suicide attack or whether the bomb was already planted in the mosque " 
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Original:  It isn't confirmed if the bomb was already planted in the mosque or just a suicide bomber had attacked . "The situation is chaos, we do not know whether it was a suicide attack or whether the bomb was already planted in the mosque  " 
Revised:  It isn't confirmed if the bomb was already planted in the mosque or just a suicide bomber had attacked . "The situation is chaos, we do not know whether it was a suicide attack or whether the bomb was already planted in the mosque , " 
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Original:   Omar was killed by a bomb as he was leaving the Shirkat Mosque.
Revised:  Mr Omar was killed by a bomb as he was leaving the Shirkat Mosque.
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Original:  Last week  Omar announced plans to increase efforts to stop the Taliban, who started attacking NATO troops  Kunduz three years ago.
Revised:  Last week Mr Omar announced plans to increase efforts to stop the Taliban, who started attacking NATO troops Kunduz three years ago.
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Original:  Last week  Omar announced plans to increase efforts to stop the Taliban, who started attacking NATO troops  Kunduz three years ago.
Revised:  Last week Omar announced plans to increase efforts to stop the Taliban, who started attacking NATO troops in Kunduz three years ago.
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Original:   Omar had previously served as the mayor of Taloqan between 1991 and 1992.
Revised:  Mr Omar had previously served as the mayor of Taloqan between 1991 and 1992.
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Original:  Soon after the fall of Taliban,  Omar was appointed as the governor of Baghlan Province where he served from 2001 to 2003.
Revised:  Soon after the fall of Taliban, Mr Omar was appointed as the governor of Baghlan Province where he served from 2001 to 2003.
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Original:  It has not yet been confirmed whether the bomb was planted near the mosque beforehand, or whether  Omar was killed by a suicide bomber.
Revised:  It has not yet been confirmed whether the bomb was planted near the mosque beforehand, or whether Mr Omar was killed by a suicide bomber.
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Original:  During the civil war, he was a member of  Islamic Dawah Organisation of Afghanistan for a short period of time . Soon after the fall of Taliban, Mr Omar was appointed as the governor of Baghlan Province where he served from 2001 to 2003.
Revised:  During the civil war, he was a member of the Islamic Dawah Organisation of Afghanistan for a short period of time . Soon after the fall of Taliban, Mr Omar was appointed as the governor of Baghlan Province where he served from 2001 to 2003.
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Original:  During the civil war, he was a member of  Islamic Dawah Organisation of Afghanistan for a short period of time . Soon after the fall of Taliban, Mr Omar was appointed as the governor of Baghlan Province where he served from 2001 to 2003.
Revised:  During the civil war, he was a member of Islamic Dawah Organisation of Afghanistan for a short period of time , before he was appointed as the governor of Baghlan Province where he served from 2001 to 2003.
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