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Original:  The series contains v. 1. c.500 -1042 , edited by Dorothy Whitelock.
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Original:  1st ed. 1955, 2nd ed. 1979 952 p. e-book, 1996 v. 2. 1042-1189 , edited by David C. Douglas and George W. Greenaway.
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Original:  1st ed. 1955, 2nd ed. 1979 952 p. e-book, 1996 v. 2. 1042-1189 , edited by David C. Douglas and George W. Greenaway.
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Original:  1st ed. 1953, 2nd ed. 1981, 1083 p . v. 3. 1189-1327 , edited by Harry Rothwell.
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Original:  1975, 1032 p . ISBN 978-0-413-23300-4 v. 4. 1327-1485 , edited by Alec R. Myers.
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Original:  1969, 1236 p . ISBN 978-0-413-23310-3 v. 5. 1485-1558 , edited by C. H. Williams.
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Original:  1967, 1082 p. OCLC 247046009 v. 6. 1558-1603 ed. by Ian Archer & Douglas Prince.
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Original:  1967, 1082 p. OCLC 247046009 v. 6. 1558-1603 ed. by Ian Archer & Douglas Prince.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-415-35097-6 v. 7. 1603-1660 ed. by Barry Coward & Peter Gaunt.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-415-19909-4 v. 8. 1660-1714 , edited by Andrew Browning.
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Original:  1953, 996 p . ISBN 978-0-203-19579-6 v. 9. American colonial documents, to 1776, edited by Merrill Jensen.
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Original:  1955, 888p . OCLC 9802673 v. 10. 1714-1783 , edited by D. B. Horn and Mary Ransome.
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Original:  1955, 888p . OCLC 9802673 v. 10. 1714-1783 , edited by D. B. Horn and Mary Ransome.
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Original:  1957, 972 p . OCLC 247046807 v. 11. 1783-1832 , edited by A.
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Original:  1959, 992 p . ISBN 978-0-203-19915-2 v. 12, pt. 1. 1833-1874 , edited by George M. Young and W. D. Handcock.
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Original:  1959, 992 p . ISBN 978-0-203-19915-2 v. 12, pt. 1. 1833-1874 , edited by George M. Young and W. D. Handcock.
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Original:  1956, 1017 p . OCLC 33037858 v. 12, pt. 2. 1874-1914 , edited W. D. Handcock.
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Original:  1956, 1017 p . OCLC 33037858 v. 12, pt. 2. 1874-1914 , edited W. D. Handcock.
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Original:  1977, 725 p . ISBN 978-0-415-14375-2 They are electronically available in various formats, including MyiLibrary, Kindle, and NetLibrary.
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Original:  A volume of selections, English historical documents, 1815-1870 in 120 pages  was published by Methuen Publishing in 1964, OCLC 62887069.
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Original:  A volume of selections, English historical documents, 1815-1870 in 120 pages  was published by Methuen Publishing in 1964, OCLC 62887069.
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Original: English Historical Documents is a standard series of publications of source material on English history by the academic publisher Eyre and Spottiswoode, now part of Oxford University Press ;
Revised: English Historical Documents (EHD) is a series of publications of source material on English history by the academic publisher Eyre and Spottiswoode, now part of Oxford University Press ;
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Original:  WorldCat shows them present in essentially all academic libraries, both large and URL Sources published in other languages (French, Anglo-Saxon, Old Norse, Latin) are given in English translation.
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Original:  They have been widely reviewed, and are considered as the basic set of this material.
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Original:  Each volume consists of a general introduction to the history and the historical sources for the period, an extensive bibliography, and sections ( with their exact nature depending on the period) on narrative sources such as chronicles and newspapers, legal documents and legislation, economic sources, literary sources, and appendices of maps and genealogies.
Revised:  Each volume consists of a general introduction to the history and the historical sources for the period, an extensive bibliography, and sections ( the details varying with the period) on narrative sources such as chronicles and newspapers, legal documents and legislation, economic sources, literary sources, and appendices of maps and genealogies.
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Original:  The series contains v. 1. c.500–1042, edited by Dorothy Whitelock.
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Original:  e-book, 1996 v. 2. 1042–1189, edited by David C. Douglas and George W. Greenaway.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-413-23300-4 v. 4. 1327–1485, edited by Alec R. Myers.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-413-23310-3 v. 5. 1485–1558, edited by C. H. Williams.
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Original:  OCLC 247046009 v. 6. 1558–1603, edited by Ian Archer & Douglas Prince.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-415-35097-6 v. 7. 1603–1660, edited by Barry Coward & Peter Gaunt.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-415-19909-4 v. 8. 1660–1714, edited by Andrew Browning.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-203-19579-6 v. 9. American colonial documents, to 1776, edited by Merrill Jensen.
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Original:  OCLC 9802673 v. 10. 1714–1783, edited by D. B. Horn and Mary Ransome.
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Original:  OCLC 247046807 v. 11. 1783–1832, edited by A.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-203-19915-2 v. 12, pt. 1. 1833–1874, edited by George M. Young and W. D. Handcock.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-203-19915-2 v. 12, pt. 1. 1833–1874, edited by George M. Young and W. D. Handcock.
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Original:  OCLC 33037858 v. 12, pt. 2. 1874–1914, edited W. D. Handcock.
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Original:  OCLC 33037858 v. 12, pt. 2. 1874–1914, edited W. D. Handcock.
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Original: Loango in Fiction The main character of B. L. Blankenship's Civil War era Western Horror dual novel "God Walks The Dark Hills: Book I%DIFDELCMD < & %%% II" is born in the Kingdom of Loango given the birth name of Chike Bancole (which he later changes to "Reginald Beauregard Valencia").
Revised:  The main character of B. L. Blankenship's Civil War era Western Horror dual novel "God Walks The Dark Hills: Book I%DIFDELCMD < & %%% II" is born in the Kingdom of Loango given the birth name of Chike Bancole (which he later changes to "Reginald Beauregard Valencia").
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Original: Loango in Fiction The main character of B. L. Blankenship's Civil War era Western Horror dual novel "God Walks The Dark Hills: Book I%DIFDELCMD < & %%% II" is born in the Kingdom of Loango given the birth name of Chike Bancole (which he later changes to "Reginald Beauregard Valencia").
Revised: Loango in Fiction %DIFDELCMD < & %%% II" is born in the Kingdom of Loango given the birth name of Chike Bancole (which he later changes to "Reginald Beauregard Valencia").
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Original: Loango in Fiction The main character of B. L. Blankenship's Civil War era Western Horror dual novel "God Walks The Dark Hills: Book I%DIFDELCMD < & %%% II" is born in the Kingdom of Loango given the birth name of Chike Bancole (which he later changes to "Reginald Beauregard Valencia").
Revised: Loango in Fiction The main character of B. L. Blankenship's Civil War era Western Horror dual novel "God Walks The Dark Hills: Book I%DIFDELCMD < & %%% given the birth name of Chike Bancole (which he later changes to "Reginald Beauregard Valencia").
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Original: Loango in Fiction The main character of B. L. Blankenship's Civil War era Western Horror dual novel "God Walks The Dark Hills: Book I%DIFDELCMD < & %%% II" is born in the Kingdom of Loango given the birth name of Chike Bancole (which he later changes to "Reginald Beauregard Valencia").
Revised: Loango in Fiction The main character of B. L. Blankenship's Civil War era Western Horror dual novel "God Walks The Dark Hills: Book I%DIFDELCMD < & %%% II" is born in the Kingdom of Loango 
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Original: From around the seventeen th century a black Jewish community was to be found on the Loango coast.
Revised: From around the seventeenth century a black Jewish community was to be found on the Loango coast.
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Original: Books Bello has authored and edited a number of non-fiction books.
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Original: Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines for Akbayan Category:People associated with Greenpeace Category:People from Rizal Category:People from Quezon City Category: Politicians from Metro Manila Category: Princeton University alumni Category:Sociology educators Category:Ateneo de Manila University alumni Category:University of California, Berkeley faculty Category:Center for Economic and Policy Research Category:Filipino communists Category:Filipino socialis
Revised: Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines for Akbayan Category:People associated with Greenpeace Category:People from Rizal Category:People from Quezon City Category: Princeton University alumni Category:Sociology educators Category:Ateneo de Manila University alumni Category:University of California, Berkeley faculty Category:Center for Economic and Policy Research Category:Filipino communists Category:Filipino socialis
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Original:  In a statement, they stayed that it wants to "push for an ambitious platform that focuses on the poor, prioritizes the neglected, and fights for the rights of ordinary Filipinos."
Revised:  In a statement, Laban ng Masa said it wants to "push for an ambitious platform that focuses on the poor, prioritizes the neglected, and fights for the rights of ordinary Filipinos."
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Original:   It may be due to erroneous reading of the name of Greenlandfrom a map (it was sometimes labeled Groẽland), or it may refer to Baffin Island or other islands in the Canadian Nunavut region.
Revised:  The name of the island may be an errant reading of Greenland. It may be due to erroneous reading of the name of Greenlandfrom a map (it was sometimes labeled Groẽland), or it may refer to Baffin Island or other islands in the Canadian Nunavut region.
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Original:  One of the first maps to show it was a Mercator map from 1569, and one of the last to show it was a Quadus map of 1608. 
Revised:  One of the first maps to show it was a Mercator map from 1569, and one of the last to show it was a Quadus map of 1608. References
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Original:   & Alt + 3 U+2665 BLACK HEART SUIT in explicit plaintext representation &#x2665;&#xfe0e;
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Original: alt=A drawn love heart on paper|A drawn love heart on paper The heart symbol is an ideograph used to express the idea of the "heart" in its metaphorical or symbolic sense.
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Original:  File:Гхани.png|The Georgian letter () is often used as a heart symbol online
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Original: The use of the heart symbol as a logograph for the English verb "to love" derives from the use in "I ♥ NY," introduced in 1977.
Revised: The use of the heart symbol as a logograph for the English verb "to love" derives from the use in "I NY," introduced in 1977.
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Original:  People could ♥ their grandchildren or line dancing or Buddha."
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Original:  People could  their grandchildren or line dancing or Buddha."
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Original: There has been some conjecture regarding the link between the traditional heart symbol and images of the fruit of Silphium , a (probably) extinct plant known to classical antiquity and belonging to the genus Ferula, used as a condiment and medicine, (the medicinal properties including contraceptive and abortifacient activity, linking the plant to sexuality and love).
Revised: There has been some conjecture regarding the link between the traditional heart symbol and images of the fruit of silphium , a (probably) extinct plant known to classical antiquity and belonging to the genus Ferula, used as a condiment and medicine, (the medicinal properties including contraceptive and abortifacient activity, linking the plant to sexuality and love).
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Original:  Celator. 9 (2): 6–8. Silver coins from the ancient Libya of the 6th - 5th  BC bear images strongly reminiscent of the heart symbol, sometimes accompanied by images of the Silphium plant.
Revised:  Celator. 9 (2): 6–8. Silver coins from the ancient Libya of the 6th to 5th BC bear images strongly reminiscent of the heart symbol, sometimes accompanied by images of the Silphium plant.
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Original:  Celator. 9 (2): 6–8. Silver coins from the ancient Libya of the 6th - 5th  BC bear images strongly reminiscent of the heart symbol, sometimes accompanied by images of the Silphium plant.
Revised:  Celator. 9 (2): 6–8. Silver coins from the ancient Libya of the 6th - 5th centuries BC bear images strongly reminiscent of the heart symbol, sometimes accompanied by images of the Silphium plant.
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Original:  Celator. 9 (2): 6–8. Silver coins from the ancient Libya of the 6th - 5th  BC bear images strongly reminiscent of the heart symbol, sometimes accompanied by images of the Silphium plant.
Revised:  Celator. 9 (2): 6–8. Silver coins from the ancient Libya of the 6th - 5th BC bear images strongly reminiscent of the heart symbol, sometimes accompanied by images of the silphium plant.
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Original:  The related Ferula species Asafoetida - which was actually used as an inferior substitute for Silphium - is regarded as an aphrodisiac in Tibet and India, suggesting yet a third amatory association relating to Silphium .
Revised:  The related Ferula species asafoetida - which was actually used as an inferior substitute for Silphium - is regarded as an aphrodisiac in Tibet and India, suggesting yet a third amatory association relating to Silphium .
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Original:  The related Ferula species Asafoetida - which was actually used as an inferior substitute for Silphium - is regarded as an aphrodisiac in Tibet and India, suggesting yet a third amatory association relating to Silphium .
Revised:  The related Ferula species Asafoetida - which was actually used as an inferior substitute for silphium - is regarded as an aphrodisiac in Tibet and India, suggesting yet a third amatory association relating to Silphium .
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Original:  The related Ferula species Asafoetida - which was actually used as an inferior substitute for Silphium - is regarded as an aphrodisiac in Tibet and India, suggesting yet a third amatory association relating to Silphium .
Revised:  The related Ferula species Asafoetida - which was actually used as an inferior substitute for Silphium - is regarded as an aphrodisiac in Tibet and India, suggesting yet a third amatory association relating to silphium .
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Original: thumbnail|Vijaysinh Mohite Patil Vijaysinh Shankarao Mohite-Patil (born 12 June 1944) is a politician from the Nationalist Congress Party and Member of Parliament (MP) for Madha in Maharashtra since the 2014 general election.
Revised:  Vijaysinh Shankarao Mohite-Patil (born 12 June 1944) is a politician from the Nationalist Congress Party and Member of Parliament (MP) for Madha in Maharashtra since the 2014 general election.
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Original: Marathi people Category:1944 births Category:People from Solapur district Category:People from Akluj Category:Maharashtra MLAs 2004–2009 Category:Marathi politicians Category:Deputy Chief Ministers of Maharashtra Category:Members of the Maharashtra Legislative Council Category:16th Lok Sabha members Category:Lok Sabha members from Maharashtra Category:Maharashtra district councillors Category:Nationalist Congress Party politicians from Maharashtra Category:Indian National Congress politicia
Revised: Marathi people Category:1944 births Category:People from Solapur district Category:People from Akluj Category:Maharashtra MLAs 2004–2009 Category:Marathi politicians Category:Deputy Chief Ministers of Maharashtra Category:Members of the Maharashtra Legislative Council Category:16th Lok Sabha members Category:Lok Sabha members from Maharashtra Category:Maharashtra district councillors Category:Nationalist Congress Party politicians from Maharashtra Category:Indian National Congress politicians Category:Bharatiya Janata Party politicians from Maharasht
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Original: About Family Father – Shankarrao Mother – Ratnprabha Wife – Nandinidevi Son – Ranjitsinh Daughter – Renuka Karnik Brother – Rajsinh, Jaysinh, Madansinh, Pratapsinh, Udaysinh Nephew – Dhairysheel, Sangramsinh,Satyasheel, Dhavalsinh, Arjunsinh, Shivtejsinh, Kirtidwajsinh Grandchildren – Vishwatejsinh, Karan and Vaishnavi.
Revised: About Family Father – Shankarrao Mother – Ratnaprabhadevi Wife – Nandinidevi Son – Ranjitsinh Daughter – Renuka Karnik Brother – Rajsinh, Jaysinh, Madansinh, Pratapsinh, Udaysinh Nephew – Dhairysheel, Sangramsinh,Satyasheel, Dhavalsinh, Arjunsinh, Shivtejsinh, Kirtidwajsinh Grandchildren – Vishwatejsinh, Karan and Vaishnavi.
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Original: Orpheus's life Pimpleia (Ancient Greek  ,  " Πιμπλεία " ) is the place where Orpheus was bornOrpheus and  Greek Religion (Mythos Books) by William Keith Guthrie and L. Alderlink,1993),ISBN-10: 0691024995,page 62 and livedOrpheus and Greek Religion (Mythos Books) by William Keith Guthrie and L. Alderlink,1993),ISBN-10: 0691024995,page 61,"... is a city Dion.
Revised: Orpheus's life Pimpleia (Ancient Greek , " Πιμπλεία " ) is the place where Orpheus was bornOrpheus and It was renowned as the birthplace and early abode of Orpheus.Orpheus and Greek Religion (Mythos Books) by William Keith Guthrie and L. Alderlink,1993),ISBN-10: 0691024995,page 62 and livedOrpheus and Greek Religion (Mythos Books) by William Keith Guthrie and L. Alderlink,1993),ISBN-10: 0691024995,page 61,"... is a city Dion.
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Original: Orpheus's life Pimpleia (Ancient Greek  ,  " Πιμπλεία " ) is the place where Orpheus was bornOrpheus and  Greek Religion (Mythos Books) by William Keith Guthrie and L. Alderlink,1993),ISBN-10: 0691024995,page 62 and livedOrpheus and Greek Religion (Mythos Books) by William Keith Guthrie and L. Alderlink,1993),ISBN-10: 0691024995,page 61,"... is a city Dion.
Revised: Orpheus's life Pimpleia (Ancient Greek , " Πιμπλεία " ) is the place where Orpheus was bornOrpheus and Greek Religion (Mythos Books) by William Keith Guthrie and L. Alderlink,1993),ISBN-10: 0691024995,page 62Orpheus and Greek Religion (Mythos Books) by William Keith Guthrie and L. Alderlink,1993),ISBN-10: 0691024995,page 61,"... is a city Dion.
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Original:  Neadr it is a village called Pimpleia.
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Original:  Cults of the MusesGreek Nymphs: Myth, Cult, Lore by Jennifer Larson,2001,ISBN-10: 0195144651,page 169: "... had cults of the Muses at several sites in Pieria: Pimpleia, Olympos, Leibethra, and perhaps Thourion.
Revised:  Cults of the Muses were also celebrated,Greek Nymphs: Myth, Cult, Lore by Jennifer Larson,2001,ISBN-10: 0195144651,page 169: "... had cults of the Muses at several sites in Pieria: Pimpleia, Olympos, Leibethra, and perhaps Thourion.
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