wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Before the shuttle lifted off on Monday Mr Bresnik said that '  this is a pretty good excuse [for missing the birth] and hopefully she will forgive me later on .' The 11 day mission of the Space Shuttle Atlantis, an extensive re-supplying of  the International Space Station involving two seperate spacewalks, will see Mr Bresnik and the rest of the crew return to Earth this Friday
Revised:  Before the shuttle lifted off on Monday Mr Bresnik said that ' this is a pretty good excuse [for missing the birth] and hopefully she will forgive me later on ". The 11 day mission of the Space Shuttle Atlantis, an extensive re-supplying of the International Space Station involving two seperate spacewalks, will see Mr Bresnik and the rest of the crew return to Earth this Friday
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Original:  Before the shuttle lifted off on Monday Mr Bresnik said that '  this is a pretty good excuse [for missing the birth] and hopefully she will forgive me later on .' The 11 day mission of the Space Shuttle Atlantis, an extensive re-supplying of  the International Space Station involving two seperate spacewalks, will see Mr Bresnik and the rest of the crew return to Earth this Friday
Revised:  Before the shuttle lifted off on Monday Mr Bresnik said that ' this is a pretty good excuse [for missing the birth] and hopefully she will forgive me later on .' The 11 day mission of the Space Shuttle Atlantis, an extensive re-supplying of the International Space Station and carried out two separate spacewalks. This will be the first astronaut Bresnik gets to see the newest addition to his family. He and wife Rebecca live in Houston with their adopted three year-old son from Ukraine
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Original:  He and wife live in Houston with their adopted three year-old son from Ukraine
Revised:  The couple live in Houston with their adopted three year-old son from Ukraine
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Original:  Lt. Col. Bresnik becomes only the second man to have become a father while in space.
Revised:  Lieutenant Colonel Bresnik becomes only the second man to have become a father while in space.
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Original:  Both are believed  to stem from organisations linked to the Irish Republican Army.
Revised:  Both are believed by authorities to stem from organisations linked to the Irish Republican Army.
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Original:  In two separate incidents police in Northern Ireland have come under attack.
Revised: The official badge of the Police Service of Northern Ireland. In two separate incidents police in Northern Ireland have come under attack.
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Original: The IRA seeks a united Ireland and has battled to convince Britain to relinquish the Northern territory.
Revised: The Republican dissidents seek a united Ireland and has battled to convince Britain to relinquish the Northern territory.
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Original: The IRA seeks a united Ireland and has battled to convince Britain to relinquish the Northern territory.
Revised: The IRA seeks a united Ireland and have battled to convince Britain to relinquish the Northern territory.
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Original:  After thirty years of gang warfare and attacks from both sides a 1998 peace deal largely ended the bloodshed.
Revised:  After thirty years of warfare and attacks from both sides a 1998 peace deal largely ended the bloodshed.
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Original:  As the annual Hajj pilgrimage by Muslims to Mecca gets under way, authorities in Saudi Arabia are concerned swine flu could hit the crowds.
Revised: Millions make the annual Mecca pilgrimage As the annual Hajj pilgrimage by Muslims to Mecca gets under way, authorities in Saudi Arabia are concerned swine flu could hit the crowds.
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Original:  All had conditions including cancer or other respiratory ailments.
Revised:  All had conditions including cancer and respiratory ailments.
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Original:  In September Egypt banned hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj due to a swine flu outbreak after an Egyptian woman returning from a  minor pilgrimage in July became the first fatality from the virus in both Africa and the Middle East 
Revised:  In September Egypt banned hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj over swine flu after an Egyptian woman returning from a minor pilgrimage in July became the first fatality from the virus in both Africa and the Middle East 
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Original: Millions make the annual Mecca pilgrimage As the annual Hajj pilgrimage by Muslims to Mecca gets under way, authorities in Saudi Arabia are concerned swine flu could hit the crowds.
Revised: Millions make the annual Mecca pilgrimage As the annual Muslim Hajj pilgrimage to Mecca gets under way, authorities in Saudi Arabia are concerned swine flu could hit the crowds.
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Original: Millions make the annual Mecca pilgrimage As the annual Hajj pilgrimage by Muslims to Mecca gets under way, authorities in Saudi Arabia are concerned swine flu could hit the crowds.
Revised: Millions make the annual Mecca pilgrimage As the annual Hajj pilgrimage by Muslims to Mecca gets underway, Saudi Arabia authorities have expressed concern swine flu could hit the crowds.
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Original:  Fourpilgrims with underlying health issues  have already died.
Revised:  Fourpilgrims with underlying health issues , have already died.
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Original:  Two men and a woman in their seventies and a seventeen-year-old girl have died,  the Health Ministry said .
Revised:  Two men and a woman in their seventies and a seventeen-year-old girl have died, according to the Health Ministry said .
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Original:  Two men and a woman in their seventies and a seventeen-year-old girl have died,  the Health Ministry said .
Revised:  Two men and a woman in their seventies and a seventeen-year-old girl have died, the Health Ministry .
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Original:  The men were from India and Sudan, the older woman from Morocco  and the teen from Nigeria.
Revised:  The men from India and Sudan, the older woman from Morocco and the teen from Nigeria.
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Original:  The men were from India and Sudan, the older woman from Morocco  and the teen from Nigeria.
Revised:  The men were from India and Sudan, the older woman from Morocco , and the teen from Nigeria.
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Original:  None had been vacinated against the virus.
Revised:  None were vaccinated against the virus.
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Original:  One victim died in Mecca and the others in Medina.
Revised:  One died in Mecca and the others in Medina.
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Original:  One victim died in Mecca and the others in Medina.
Revised:  One victim died in Mecca , the others in Medina.
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Original:  Four more people are in Saudi hospitals in a critical condition and a further twelve are hospitalised and recovering .
Revised:  Four more people are in Saudi hospitals in critical condition and a further twelve are hospitalised and recovering .
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Original:  Four more people are in Saudi hospitals in a critical condition and a further twelve are hospitalised and recovering .
Revised:  Four more people are in Saudi hospitals in a critical condition and a further twelve are recovering in hospital .
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Original:  Three million people make the pilgrimage every year, and the Saudi authorities are concerned about the possible spread of the virus.
Revised:  Three million people make the pilgrimage . And, Saudi authorities are concerned about the possible spread of the virus.
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Original:  A pilgrimage to Mecca is mandatory at least once for every Muslim capable of it. 15,000 extra medical staff have been deployedwhile ports and airports screen incomers with thermal cameras .
Revised:  At least one pilgrimage to Mecca is mandatory at least once for every Muslim capable of it. 15,000 extra medical staff have been deployedwhile ports and airports screen incomers with thermal cameras .
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Original:  A pilgrimage to Mecca is mandatory at least once for every Muslim capable of it. 15,000 extra medical staff have been deployedwhile ports and airports screen incomers with thermal cameras .
Revised:  A pilgrimage to Mecca is deemed mandatory for every Muslim capable of it. 15,000 extra medical staff have been deployedwhile ports and airports screen incomers with thermal cameras .
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Original:  A pilgrimage to Mecca is mandatory at least once for every Muslim capable of it. 15,000 extra medical staff have been deployedwhile ports and airports screen incomers with thermal cameras .
Revised:  A pilgrimage to Mecca is mandatory at least once for every Muslim capable of doing so. Fifteen thousand extra medical staff have been deployedwhile ports and airports screen incomers with thermal cameras .
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Original:  A pilgrimage to Mecca is mandatory at least once for every Muslim capable of it. 15,000 extra medical staff have been deployedwhile ports and airports screen incomers with thermal cameras .
Revised:  A pilgrimage to Mecca is mandatory at least once for every Muslim capable of it. 15,000 extra medical staff are deployed, ports and airports screen incomers with thermal cameras .
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Original:  Hundreds of extra hospital beds have been set aside and visas are only granted to those who have been vaccinated .
Revised:  Hundreds of extra hospital beds have been set aside . Visa requirements specify only those vaccinated against the flu strain can apply .
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Original:  In September Egypt banned hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj over swine flu after an Egyptian woman returning from a more minor pilgrimage in July became the first fatality from the virus in both Africa and the Middle East.
Revised:  In September , Egypt forbade hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj over swine flu after an Egyptian woman returning from a more minor pilgrimage in July became the first fatality from the virus in both Africa and the Middle East.
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Original:  In September Egypt banned hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj over swine flu after an Egyptian woman returning from a more minor pilgrimage in July became the first fatality from the virus in both Africa and the Middle East.
Revised:  In September Egypt banned hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj after an Egyptian woman returning from a more minor pilgrimage in July became the first fatality from the virus in both Africa and the Middle East.
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Original:  In September Egypt banned hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj over swine flu after an Egyptian woman returning from a more minor pilgrimage in July became the first fatality from the virus in both Africa and the Middle East.
Revised:  In September Egypt banned hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj over swine flu after an Egyptian woman returning from a more minor pilgrimage last July became the first fatality from the virus in both Africa and the Middle East.
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Original:  In September Egypt banned hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj over swine flu after an Egyptian woman returning from a more minor pilgrimage in July became the first fatality from the virus in both Africa and the Middle East.
Revised:  In September Egypt banned hundreds of Muslims from leaving Cairo for the Hajj over swine flu after an Egyptian woman returning from a more minor pilgrimage in July became the first swine flu fatality in both Africa and the Middle East.
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Original:  For Ramadan  pilgrimage to Saudi Arabia was banned by the Iranians for the same reason
Revised:  For Ramadan , pilgrimage to Saudi Arabia was banned by the Iranians for the same reason
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Original:  For Ramadan  pilgrimage to Saudi Arabia was banned by the Iranians for the same reason
Revised:  For Ramadan pilgrimage to Saudi Arabia was banned by Iran for the same reason
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Original: Millions make the annual Mecca pilgrimage  As the annual Muslim Hajj pilgrimage to Mecca gets underway, Saudi Arabia authorities have expressed concern swine flu could impact pilgrims.
Revised: Millions make the annual Mecca pilgrimage . As the annual Muslim Hajj pilgrimage to Mecca gets underway, Saudi Arabia authorities have expressed concern swine flu could impact pilgrims.
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Original:  As the annual Muslim Hajj pilgrimage to Mecca gets underway, Saudi Arabia authorities have expressed concern swine flu could impact pilgrims.
Revised:  As the annual Muslim Hajj pilgrimage to Mecca gets underway, Saudi Arabian authorities have expressed concern swine flu could impact pilgrims.
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Original: Feoktistov  important in the early development of Soviet space travel and was part of the first group space flight in history aboard the Voskhod spaceship in 1964.
Revised: Feoktistov was important in the early development of Soviet space travel and was part of the first group space flight in history aboard the Voskhod spaceship in 1964.
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Original: Feoktistov  important in the early development of Soviet space travel and was part of the first group space flight in history aboard the Voskhod spaceship in 1964.
Revised: Feoktistov important in the early development of Soviet space travel and was part of the first group space flight in history aboard the Voskhod spacecraft in 1964.
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Original:  He was   born in Voronezh in 1926 and was wounded whilst serving in WWII.
Revised:  He was He was born in Voronezh in 1926 and was wounded whilst serving in WWII.
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Original:  His inclusion in the spaceflight programme was often met by resistance from the Soviet government as he was neither a communist or in the military at the time.
Revised:  His inclusion in the spaceflight programme was often met by resistance from the Soviet government as he was neither a member of the communist party or in the military at the time.
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Original: Konstantin Feoktistov on a Russian stamp from 1964.
Revised: A 1964 Russian stamp featuring cosmonaut Konstantin Feoktistov.
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Original:  Pioneering Soviet cosmonaut Konstantin Feoktistov has died aged 83.
Revised:  Pioneering Soviet cosmonaut has died aged 83.
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Original:  Feoktistov was important in the early development of Soviet space travel and was part of the first group spaceflight in history, as part of the Voskhod 1 mission in 1964.
Revised:  Feoktistov was important in the early development of Soviet space travel and was part of the first group spaceflight in history, as part of the mission in 1964.
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Original:  His inclusion in the spaceflight programme was often met by resistance from the Soviet government as he was neither a member of the communist party or in the military at the time.
Revised:  His inclusion in the spaceflight programme was often met by resistance from the Soviet government as he was neither a member of the party or in the military at the time.
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Original:  After his retirement from space travel he continued to work as a designer and engineer for the space programme until 1990, helping to design spacecraft and space stations such as Mir and Soyuz, amongst others
Revised:  After his retirement from space travel he continued to work as a designer and engineer for the space programme until 1990, helping to design spacecraft and space stations such as and Soyuz, amongst others
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Original:  The ball of twine's domicile is a mini-museam located in the downtown of Cawker City, Kansas, which onlookers can simple look at or add twine t 
Revised:  The ball of twine's domicile is a mini-museam located in the downtown of Cawker City, Kansas, which onlookers can simple look at or add twine to. 
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Original: A Friday protest in downtown Richmond drew over 200 protestors to Virginia’s state capital to demonstrate against Massey Energy Co’s strip mining practices.
Revised: A Friday protest in downtown Richmond drew around 200 protestors to Virginia’s state capital to demonstrate against Massey Energy Co’s strip mining practices.
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Original:  Demonstrators  gathered in front of the company’s office building  nearly 20 laid in the street of the city’s main thoroughfare  and were nearly arrested.
Revised:  Demonstrators gathered in front of the company’s office building where nearly 20 laid in the street of the city’s main thoroughfare and were nearly arrested.
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Original:  Demonstrators  gathered in front of the company’s office building  nearly 20 laid in the street of the city’s main thoroughfare  and were nearly arrested.
Revised:  Demonstrators gathered in front of the company’s office building nearly 20 laid in the street of the city’s main thoroughfare , and were nearly arrested.
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Original:  Massey is the United States fourth-largest coal mining company operation.
Revised:  Massey is the United States fourth-largest coal mining operation.
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Original:  A statement was issued by a Massey spokesman defended their respects to people’s rights, and decried what they say is, “a great deal of misinformation.”
Revised:  A statement was issued by a Massey spokesman defended their respect to people’s rights, and decried what they say is, “a great deal of misinformation.”
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Original: A Friday protest in downtown Richmond drew around 200 protestors to Virginia’s state capital to demonstrate against Massey Energy Co’s strip mining practices  . Demonstrators marched through town and gathered in front of the company’s office building where nearly 20 laid in the street of the city’s main thoroughfare, and were nearly arrested.
Revised: A Friday protest in downtown Richmond drew around 200 protestors to Virginia’s state capital to demonstrate against strip mining practices . Demonstrators marched through town and gathered in front of the company’s office building where nearly 20 laid in the street of the city’s main thoroughfare, and were nearly arrested.
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Original:  The company’s mining operations are  in the Appalachian Mountain chain in the states of Virginia, West Virginia , Kentucky and Tennessee.
Revised:  The company’s mining operations are located in the Appalachian Mountain chain in the states of Virginia, West Virginia , Kentucky and Tennessee.
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Original:  A statement was issued by a Massey spokesman defended their respect to people’s rights, and decried what they said was, “a great deal of misinformation.”
Revised:  A statement issued by a Massey spokesman defended their respect to people’s rights, and decried what they said was, “a great deal of misinformation.”
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Original:  A statement was issued by a Massey spokesman defended their respect to people’s rights, and decried what they said was, “a great deal of misinformation.”
Revised:  A statement was issued by a Massey spokesman defended their respect of people’s rights, and decried what they said was, “a great deal of misinformation.”
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Original:  The Richmond Times-Dispatch reported that  “legal observers” accompanied the demonstrators carrying notebooks to record crowd and police activity
Revised:  The Richmond Times-Dispatch reported that “legal observers” accompanied the demonstrators and carried notebooks to record crowd and police activity
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Original:  Massey is the United States  fourth-largest coal mining operation.
Revised:  Massey is the United States ' fourth-largest coal mining operation.
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Original:  Arrests for civil disobedience were avoided when two security guards were sent by the company to retrieve a list of their demands.
Revised:  Arrests for were avoided when two security guards were sent by the company to retrieve a list of their demands.
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Original:  The company’s mining operations are located in the Appalachian Mountain chain in the states of Virginia, West Virginia, Kentucky and Tennessee.
Revised:  The company’s mining operations are located in the in the states of Virginia, West Virginia, Kentucky and Tennessee.
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Original:  The Richmond Times-Dispatch reported that unofficial "legal observers" accompanied the demonstrators and carried notebooks to record crowd and police activity
Revised:  The reported that unofficial "legal observers" accompanied the demonstrators and carried notebooks to record crowd and police activity
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Original: The Independent Sport Panel Report (Crawford Report) was published in Australia last week, prompting heated debate and speculation on the future for Australian sport.
Revised: The Independent Sport Panel Report (Crawford Report) was published in Australia last week, prompting debate and speculation on the future for Australian sport.
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Original:  Key recomendation  areas from the Report are: Australians now await the Government response to the recomendations and what, if any, actions will be taken.
Revised:  Key recomendation areas from the Report are: Australians now await 
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Original:  The President of the Australian Olympic Committee, John Coates has responded to the report by arguing for funding Olympic sports in an article in The Australian.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sally Robbins argues strongly for Olympic funding in an article in the WA Today, and The Canberra Times cites Cadel Evans, Anna Mears an Ken Wallace as supporters of Government funding for Olympic sports.
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Original:  It is a cost most of us are prepared to pay.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Andrew Southcott response to the Report indicates that a Top 10 Olympics’ finish is not good enough.
Revised:  It is a cost most of us are prepared to pay.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Andrew Southcott response to the 
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Original:  Simon Crean was reported by The Australian as rejecting the report's recomendations, stating that Australia’s sporting success was “a fundamental part of the Australian brand”.
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Original:  A video by the Sydney Morning Herald captures statements by Australian athletes supporting funding for elite sport.
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Original:  Australia needs a renaissance of our lost culture of the fun and exhilaration we enjoyed through active participation in sports.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An editorial in The Age states that: Australians will celebrate any gold medal won in 2012, even if it is in a sport they never think of between Olympics and even if it is won by someone they have not previously heard of and might never hear of again.
Revised:  Australia needs a renaissance of our lost culture of the fun and exhilaration we enjoyed through active participation in sports.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Australians will celebrate any gold medal won in 2012, even if it is in a sport they never think of between Olympics and even if it is won by someone they have not previously heard of and might never hear of again.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In an earlier article Richard Hinds observes that “It remains to be seen if the Crawford Report will be successful in its laudable intentions: to ensure government spending leads to increased grassroots participation, greater inclusiveness, the restoration of physical education in schools, a positive impact on public health and to improve and empower poorly administered sports.”
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Original:  In the Sydney Morning Herald again, Dan Silkstone explores the Report’s focus on participation sports and in another article discusses the gold medal stoush.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ruth Brown, Charlie Happell and Trevor Cook provided a Crikey view of the Crawford report.
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