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Original:  The urban beach attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the hydraulophone , a musical instrument that uses only a small amount of water in order to create a fun and playful space that engages both the mind and body   .
Revised:  The urban beach attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the hydraulophone , a musical instrument that uses only a small amount of water in order to create a fun and cool space that engages both the mind and body .
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Original:  The urban beach attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the hydraulophone , a musical instrument that uses only a small amount of water in order to create a fun and playful space that engages both the mind and body   .
Revised:  The urban beach attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the hydraulophone , a musical instrument that uses only a small amount of water in order to create a fun and playful space that engages both the mind and body Water Water is what you drink. You need it to survive; but some people are using it to make people forget their dreary lives in the form of "aquatic play". The end thanks for reading I worked hard This is water. Embrace it .
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Original: Intima-media thickness (IMT), also called intimal medial thickness, is a measurement of the thickness of tunica intima and tunica media, the innermost two layers of the wall of an artery.
Revised: Intima–media thickness (IMT), also called intimal medial thickness, is a measurement of the thickness of tunica intima and tunica media, the innermost two layers of the wall of an artery.
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Original:  Often,  IMT is measured in three locations: in the common carotid artery (typically at one cm proximal to the flow divider), at the bifurcation, and in the internal carotid artery.
Revised:  Often, carotid IMT is measured in three locations: in the common carotid artery (typically at one cm proximal to the flow divider), at the bifurcation, and in the internal carotid artery.
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Original:  For the football player, see Aiyegbeni Yakubu .
Revised:  For the football player, see Yakubu Aiyegbeni .
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Original:  From 1807 until 1808, Saunders attended Moor ’ s Charity School at Dartmouth College, in Hanover, New Hampshire under the sponsorship of Hinckley.
Revised:  From 1807 until 1808, Saunders attended Moor ' s Charity School at Dartmouth College, in Hanover, New Hampshire under the sponsorship of Hinckley.
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Original: Prince Saunders (1775–1839) was an African American teacher, scholar, diplomat, and author who  was born in either Lebanon, Connecticut  or Thetford, Vermont according to various sources . During his life, Saunders helped set up schools for African Americans in Massachusetts and also in Haiti, for King Henri Christophe.
Revised: Prince Saunders (1775–1839) was an African American teacher, scholar, diplomat, and author who was born in either Lebanon, Connecticut , or Thetford, Vermont according to various sources . During his life, Saunders helped set up schools for African Americans in Massachusetts and also in Haiti, for King Henri Christophe.
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Original: Prince Saunders (1775–1839) was an African American teacher, scholar, diplomat, and author who  was born in either Lebanon, Connecticut  or Thetford, Vermont according to various sources . During his life, Saunders helped set up schools for African Americans in Massachusetts and also in Haiti, for King Henri Christophe.
Revised: Prince Saunders (1775–1839) was an African American teacher, scholar, diplomat, and author who was born in either Lebanon, Connecticut or Thetford, Vermont . During his life, Saunders helped set up schools for African Americans in Massachusetts and also in Haiti, for King Henri Christophe.
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Original:  The program is an educational look into "taboo" rituals and traditions practiced in some societies, yet forbidden and  illegal in others.
Revised:  The program is an educational look into "taboo" rituals and traditions practiced in some societies, yet forbidden and /or illegal in others.
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Original: Season 9 "Living With the Dead" - Jun. 17, 2012 "Strange Behavior" - Jun. 24, 2012 "Booze" - Jul. 1, 2012 "Teen Sex" - Jul. 8, 2012 "Extreme Collectors" - Jul. 15, 2012 "Ugly" - Jul. 22, 2012 "Nasty Jobs" - Jul. 29, 2012 "Weird Weddings" - Aug. 5, 2012 "Strange Passions" - Aug. 19, 2012 "U.S. of Alcohol" - Sept. 2, 2012 "Extreme Bodies" - Sept. 23, 2012 "Changing Gender " - Sept. 30, 2012 "Weird Collections" - Oct. 2, 2012 "Private Passions" - Oct. 9, 2012 "Old Enough?"
Revised: Season 9 "Living With the Dead" - Jun. 17, 2012 "Strange Behavior" - Jun. 24, 2012 "Booze" - Jul. 1, 2012 "Teen Sex" - Jul. 8, 2012 "Extreme Collectors" - Jul. 15, 2012 "Ugly" - Jul. 22, 2012 "Nasty Jobs" - Jul. 29, 2012 "Weird Weddings" - Aug. 5, 2012 "Strange Passions" - Aug. 19, 2012 "U.S. of Alcohol" - Sept. 2, 2012 "Extreme Bodies" - Sept. 23, 2012 "Changing Sex " - Sept. 30, 2012 "Weird Collections" - Oct. 2, 2012 "Private Passions" - Oct. 9, 2012 "Old Enough?"
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Original: Cellou Dalein Diallo (3 February 1952"Le nouveau PM guinéen définit des priorités de son gouvernement" , Xinhua, 14 December 2004 .) is a Guinean economist and politician who is the President elect of The Republic of Guinea and was Prime Minister of Guinea from 2004 to 2006.
Revised: Cellou Dalein Diallo (3 February 1952"Le nouveau PM guinéen définit des priorités de son gouvernement" , Xinhua, 14 December 2004 .) is a Guinean economist and politician who was Prime Minister of Guinea from 2004 to 2006.
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Original:  He is a candidate in the 2020 Guinean presidential election  .
Revised:  He was a candidate in the 2020 Guinean presidential election .
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Original: Cellou Dalein Diallo (3 February 1952"Le nouveau PM guinéen définit des priorités de son gouvernement " , Xinhua, 14 December 2004 .) is a Guinean economist and politician who was Prime Minister of Guinea from 2004 to 2006.
Revised: Cellou Dalein Diallo (3 February 1952"Le nouveau PM guinéen définit des priorités de son government " , Xinhua, 14 December 2004 .) is a Guinean economist and politician who was Prime Minister of Guinea from 2004 to 2006.
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Original:  Known for their grit and determination, they once completed a rally despite having a flat rear tyre with Anita having to sit on the petrol tank of the bike for a distance of 70 km to reduce the weight on the flat tyre.
Revised:  Known for their grit and determination, they once completed a rally despite having a flat rear tyre with Anita having to sit on the petrol tank of the bike for a distance of to reduce the weight on the flat tyre.
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Original:  Jagat is usually the  driver while his wife  Anita dons the role of the navigator.
Revised:  Jagat is usually the driver while his wife , Anita dons the role of the navigator.
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Original:  Jagat is usually the rider / driver while his wife , Anita dons the role of the navigator.
Revised:  Jagat is usually the driver while his wife , Anita dons the role of the navigator.
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Original:  Jagat is usually the rider / driver while his wife , Anita dons the role of the navigator.
Revised:  Jagat is usually the rider / driver while his wife Anita dons the role of the navigator.
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Original: "Pacification" : 1900-1905 In 1901, French administrator Xavier Coppolani began a plan of "peaceful penetration" into the territories of Trarza and its fellow emirates.
Revised: Pacification : 1900-1905 In 1901, French administrator Xavier Coppolani began a plan of "peaceful penetration" into the territories of Trarza and its fellow emirates.
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Original:  In the space of four years (1901–1905), Coppolani traveled the area signing "protectorates " over much of what is now Mauritania, and beginning the expansion of French forces.
Revised:  In the space of four years (1901–1905), Coppolani traveled the area signing protectorates over much of what is now Mauritania, and beginning the expansion of French forces.
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Original:  Tom Perls  
Revised:  Tom Perls . 
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Original:  The New England Centenarian Study The study began in 1994 and was originally focused on research into Alzheimer's.
Revised:  The study began in 1994 and was originally focused on research into Alzheimer's.
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Original:  In 2006, an offshoot, the New England Supercentenarian Study, was begun  
Revised:  In 2006, an offshoot, the New England Supercentenarian Study, was begun . 
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Original: A study of gene tests of hundreds of centenarians , people 100 years of age or older, reported in July, 2010 that genetics plays an extremely important role in deciding who reaches that age.
Revised: A study of gene tests of hundreds of centenarians reported in July, 2010 that genetics plays an extremely important role in deciding who reaches that age.
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Original:  It is one of the oldest, largest and most prestigious studies in the USA and the world.
Revised:  It is one of the oldest, largest and most prestigious studies of its kind in the world.
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Original:  It is one of the oldest, largest and most prestigious studies of its kind in the world.
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Original: Deuterated omega-6 fatty acids for humans with degenerative diseases The company Retrotope pioneered the development a source of deuterated omega-6 fatty acid 11,11-D2-ethyl linoleate (RT001) as a food additive for  treatment of neurodegenerative diseases such as Friedreich’s ataxia and infantile neuroaxonal dystrophy.
Revised: Deuterated omega-6 fatty acids for humans with degenerative diseases The company Retrotope pioneered the development a source of deuterated omega-6 fatty acid 11,11-D2-ethyl linoleate (RT001) as a food additive for potential treatment of neurodegenerative diseases such as Friedreich’s ataxia and infantile neuroaxonal dystrophy.
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Original:  Different from treatment with heavy water After publication in scientific literature, the concept of isotopic food moved on to popular science publicationsEat isotopes to live longer Gross M. 22 March 2007.
Revised:  The difference from the treatment with heavy water After publication in scientific literature, the concept of isotopic food moved on to popular science publicationsEat isotopes to live longer Gross M. 22 March 2007.
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Original: ]] iFood (isotopic food) contains nutritients in which some atoms are replaced with their heavier non-radioactive isotopes (such as 2H or  13C ) . Biomolecules that incorporate heavier isotopes give rise to more stable molecular structures with increased resistance to damages associated with URL or diseases.
Revised: ]] iFood (isotopic food) contains nutritients in which some atoms are replaced with their heavier non-radioactive isotopes (such as 2H or 13C . Biomolecules that incorporate heavier isotopes give rise to more stable molecular structures with increased resistance to damages associated with URL or diseases.
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Original:  In a scientific study Nematodes given ifood lived 15\% longer than URL
Revised:  In a scientific study Nematodes given ifood lived 15\% longer than controls.
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Original: File:Ethyl linoleate ordinary and heavy.jpg| width= 400px|Chemical formulae of ethyl linoleate — natural and its deuterated version 11,11-D2-ethyl linoleate (RT001).
Revised: File:Ethyl linoleate ordinary and heavy.jpg| 400px|Chemical formulae of ethyl linoleate — natural and its deuterated version 11,11-D2-ethyl linoleate (RT001).
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Original:  In a scientific study Nematodes given ifood lived 15\% longer than controls.
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Original: ]] iFood (isotopic food) contains nutrients in which some atoms are replaced with their heavier non-radioactive isotopes, such as deuterium 2H or heavy carbon 13C.
Revised: ]] A heavy isotope diet is one in that contains nutrients in which some atoms are replaced with their heavier non-radioactive isotopes, such as deuterium 2H or heavy carbon 13C.
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Original:  Biomolecules that incorporate heavier isotopes give rise to more stable molecular structures with increased resistance to damages associated with URL or diseases.
Revised:  Biomolecules that incorporate heavier isotopes give rise to more stable molecular structures , which is hypothesized to increase resistance to damage associated with URL or diseases.
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Original:  The examples are deuterated polyunsaturated fatty acids (iFat) , essential aminoacids, DNA bases such as cytosine, or heavy water and glucose.
Revised:  The examples are deuterated polyunsaturated fatty acids , essential aminoacids, DNA bases such as cytosine, or heavy water and glucose.
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Original:  FDA has granted it an orphan drug designation and it passed the Phase I/II clinical trials (as of 2018) .
Revised:  FDA has granted it an orphan drug designation and it passed the Phase I/II clinical trials (as of 2018) 
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Original:  Any company referencing NASA directly in its marketing campaigns is misleading and has no relevance to the discipline of vibration training . (citation needed)
Revised:  Companies referencing NASA directly in its marketing campaigns is misleading and has no relevance to the discipline of vibration training . (citation needed)
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Original:  Any company referencing NASA directly in its marketing campaigns is misleading and has no relevance to the discipline of vibration training . (citation needed)
Revised:  Any company referencing NASA directly in their marketing campaigns in relation to vibration training for muscular activity may be misleading . (citation needed)
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Original:  Some research supports benefits for URL neuropathy, back pain, knee pain, plantar fasciitis, fibromyalgia, balance, , diabetes, and constipation.
Revised:  Some research supports benefits for arthritis, neuropathy, back pain, knee pain, plantar fasciitis, fibromyalgia, balance, , diabetes, and constipation.
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Original:  Some research supports benefits for URL neuropathy, back pain, knee pain, plantar fasciitis, fibromyalgia, balance, , diabetes, and constipation.
Revised:  Some research supports benefits for URL neuropathy, back pain, knee pain, plantar fasciitis, fibromyalgia, balance, diabetes, and constipation.
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Original:  The type of platform used is a moderator of the effect and result of the training or therapy performed (Marin PJ, Rhea MR, 2010) .
Revised:  The type of platform used is a moderator of the effect and result of the training or therapy performed .
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Original:  Concerning the z-movements, two main types of system can be distinguished (Marin PJ et al. 2010, Rittweger 2010, Rauch 2010) : Side alternating (pivotal) systems, operating like a see-saw and hence mimicking the human gait where one foot is always moving upwards and the other one downwards, and Linear systems where the whole platform is mainly doing the same motion, respectively: both feet are moved upwards or downwards at the same time.
Revised:  Concerning the z-movements, two main types of system can be distinguished : Side alternating (pivotal) systems, operating like a see-saw and hence mimicking the human gait where one foot is always moving upwards and the other one downwards, and Linear systems where the whole platform is mainly doing the same motion, respectively: both feet are moved upwards or downwards at the same time.
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Original: As a hazard Humans are sensitive to mechanical oscillations ranging in frequency from well below 1 Hz up to 100 Hz . Lower frequencies of vibration lead to human motion sickness while higher frequencies can lead to general annoyance and discomfort.
Revised: As a hazard Humans are sensitive to mechanical oscillations ranging in frequency from well below 1 Hz up to 100 kHz . Lower frequencies of vibration lead to human motion sickness while higher frequencies can lead to general annoyance and discomfort.
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Original: Digital Partograph Digital partograph is an electronic implementation of standard paper based Partogram Partograph/Partogram that can work on a mobile or tablet pc.
Revised: Digital Partograph Digital partograph is an electronic implementation of standard paper-based Partograph/Partogram that can work on a mobile or tablet pc.
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Original:  Electronic partograph can remind the staff nurse to enter a labour vital in case they forget the standard protocol.
Revised:  Electronic partograph can remind the staff nurse to enter labour vital in case they forget the standard protocol.
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Original:  One side effect of electronic partograph is that it makes a digital copy of  data available.
Revised:  One side effect of electronic partograph is that it makes a digital copy of the data available.
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Original:  It is important to pick the correct digital partograph solution in order to make sure that it is seen as an easy to use by its end users.
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Original: partograph A partogram or partograph is a composite graphical record of key data (maternal and fetal) during labour entered against time on a single sheet of paper.
Revised: Partograph A partogram or partograph is a composite graphical record of key data (maternal and fetal) during labour entered against time on a single sheet of paper.
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Original:  Drugs and Fluids Blood pressure: It is recorded in vertical lines at an interval of 2 hours.
Revised:  Drugs and fluids Blood pressure: It is recorded in vertical lines at an interval of 2 hours.
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Original:  Urine analysis Temperature record It requires a skilled healhcare worker who can fill and interpret the partograph  Recent studies have shown there is no evidence that partograph use is detrimental to outcomes  Often paper-partograph and  equipment required to complete it are unavailable in low resource settings  Despite decades of training and investment, implementation rates and capacity to correctly use the partograph are very low.
Revised:  Urine analysis Temperature record It requires a skilled healhcare worker who can fill and interpret the partograph . Recent studies have shown there is no evidence that partograph use is detrimental to outcomes Often paper-partograph and equipment required to complete it are unavailable in low resource settings Despite decades of training and investment, implementation rates and capacity to correctly use the partograph are very low.
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Original:  Urine analysis Temperature record It requires a skilled healhcare worker who can fill and interpret the partograph  Recent studies have shown there is no evidence that partograph use is detrimental to outcomes  Often paper-partograph and  equipment required to complete it are unavailable in low resource settings  Despite decades of training and investment, implementation rates and capacity to correctly use the partograph are very low.
Revised:  Urine analysis Temperature record It requires a skilled healhcare worker who can fill and interpret the partograph Recent studies have shown there is no evidence that partograph use is detrimental to outcomes . Often paper-partograph and equipment required to complete it are unavailable in low resource settings Despite decades of training and investment, implementation rates and capacity to correctly use the partograph are very low.
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Original:  Urine analysis Temperature record It requires a skilled healhcare worker who can fill and interpret the partograph  Recent studies have shown there is no evidence that partograph use is detrimental to outcomes  Often paper-partograph and  equipment required to complete it are unavailable in low resource settings  Despite decades of training and investment, implementation rates and capacity to correctly use the partograph are very low.
Revised:  Urine analysis Temperature record It requires a skilled healhcare worker who can fill and interpret the partograph Recent studies have shown there is no evidence that partograph use is detrimental to outcomes Often paper-partograph and the equipment required to complete it are unavailable in low resource settings Despite decades of training and investment, implementation rates and capacity to correctly use the partograph are very low.
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Original:  Urine analysis Temperature record It requires a skilled healhcare worker who can fill and interpret the partograph  Recent studies have shown there is no evidence that partograph use is detrimental to outcomes  Often paper-partograph and  equipment required to complete it are unavailable in low resource settings  Despite decades of training and investment, implementation rates and capacity to correctly use the partograph are very low.
Revised:  Urine analysis Temperature record It requires a skilled healhcare worker who can fill and interpret the partograph Recent studies have shown there is no evidence that partograph use is detrimental to outcomes Often paper-partograph and equipment required to complete it are unavailable in low resource settings . Despite decades of training and investment, implementation rates and capacity to correctly use the partograph are very low.
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Original:  Use of a partograph in established labour is recommended by the National Institute for Clinical Excellence (NICE) URL in the "Intrapartum Care" guideline.
Revised:  Use of a partograph in established labour is recommended by the National Institute for Clinical Excellence (NICE) in the "Intrapartum Care" guideline.
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Original:  Digital Partograph Digital partograph is an electronic implementation of  standard paper-based Partograph / Partogram that can work on a mobile or tablet pc . Partograph is a paper-based tool developed by  W.H.O. to monitor labour during pregnancy.
Revised:  Digital partograph A digital partograph is an electronic implementation of standard paper-based Partograph / Partogram that can work on a mobile or tablet pc . Partograph is a paper-based tool developed by W.H.O. to monitor labour during pregnancy.
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Original:  Digital Partograph Digital partograph is an electronic implementation of  standard paper-based Partograph / Partogram that can work on a mobile or tablet pc . Partograph is a paper-based tool developed by  W.H.O. to monitor labour during pregnancy.
Revised:  Digital Partograph Digital partograph is an electronic implementation of the standard paper-based Partograph / Partogram that can work on a mobile or tablet pc . Partograph is a paper-based tool developed by W.H.O. to monitor labour during pregnancy.
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Original:  Digital Partograph Digital partograph is an electronic implementation of  standard paper-based Partograph / Partogram that can work on a mobile or tablet pc . Partograph is a paper-based tool developed by  W.H.O. to monitor labour during pregnancy.
Revised:  Digital Partograph Digital partograph is an electronic implementation of standard paper-based partograph / Partogram that can work on a mobile or tablet pc . Partograph is a paper-based tool developed by W.H.O. to monitor labour during pregnancy.
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