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Original:  Much controversy was caused by the suggestion it may be used, since international regulations limit the use of materials intended for safety investiagations as evidence to prove liability in crimminal or civil cases.
Revised:  Much controversy was caused by the suggestion it may be used, since international regulations limit the use of materials intended for safety investiagations as evidence to prove liability in criminal or civil cases.
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Original:  Kamal Firdaus, council for the pilot, explained what this means for his client . "Today the documentation has been officially accepted by the prosecutor," he said.
Revised:  Kamal Firdaus, council for the pilot, explained what this means for his client : "Today the documentation has been officially accepted by the prosecutor," he said.
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Original:  Kamal Firdaus, council for the pilot, explained what this means for his client . "Today the documentation has been officially accepted by the prosecutor," he said.
Revised:  Kamal Firdaus, council for the pilot, explained what this means for his client . "Today the documentation has been officially accepted by the prosecutor," adding, "
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Original:  He added that he felt it would be "difficult" for liability to be established and that  " We are ready and it will be a very interesting legal case, so let's see what will happen in the court." Komar, 45, is believed to be the first pilot prosecuted over an air accident in Indonesia despite the country's poor aviation safety record.
Revised:  Firdaus commented that it would be "difficult" for liability to be established and that " We are ready and it will be a very interesting legal case, so let's see what will happen in the court." Komar, 45, is believed to be the first pilot prosecuted over an air accident in Indonesia despite the country's poor aviation safety record.
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Original:  He added that he felt it would be "difficult" for liability to be established and that  " We are ready and it will be a very interesting legal case, so let's see what will happen in the court." Komar, 45, is believed to be the first pilot prosecuted over an air accident in Indonesia despite the country's poor aviation safety record.
Revised:  He added that he felt it would be "difficult" for liability to be established and that , " We are ready and it will be a very interesting legal case, so let's see what will happen in the court." Komar, 45, is believed to be the first pilot prosecuted over an air accident in Indonesia despite the country's poor aviation safety record.
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Original:  He added that he felt it would be "difficult" for liability to be established and that  " We are ready and it will be a very interesting legal case, so let's see what will happen in the court." Komar, 45, is believed to be the first pilot prosecuted over an air accident in Indonesia despite the country's poor aviation safety record.
Revised:  He added that he felt it would be "difficult" for liability to be established and that " we are ready and it will be a very interesting legal case, so let's see what will happen in the court." Komar, 45, is believed to be the first pilot prosecuted over an air accident in Indonesia despite the country's poor aviation safety record.
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Original:  His case is considered a landmark, with aviation groups believing his trial may set the precedent for any pilot involved in future accidents.
Revised:  His case is considered a landmark, with aviation groups believing his trial may set the precedent for pilots involved in future accidents.
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Original:  NASA's Phoenix Lander has begun to cook a scoop full of Martian soil after soil samples .
Revised:  NASA's Phoenix Lander has begun to cook a scoop full of Martian soil .
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Original:  For reasons unknown to scientists  and after several  attempts to break up the soil, a large amount was discovered to have passed though a screen leading to an on board oven.
Revised:  For reasons unknown to scientists , and after several attempts to break up the soil, a large amount was discovered to have passed though a screen leading to an on board oven.
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Original:  Minerals may also burn off and scientists say that vapors from anything that evaporates or vaporizes , will be tested and analyzed.
Revised:  Minerals may also burn off and scientists say that vapors from anything that evaporates or vaporizes will be tested and analyzed.
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Original:  After some debate, NASA decided to 'shake' the soil in hopes  it would break up the larger particles.
Revised:  After some debate, NASA decided to 'shake' the soil in hopes that it would break up the larger particles.
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Original:  To much disappointment and after six tries using this method, only a few particles got through the screen.
Revised:  To much disappointment after six tries using this method, only a few particles got through the screen.
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Original:  After a few days of troubleshooting, NASA looked back at the soil and discovered that  for an unknown reason, a large amount of soil fell through the screen and was ready for inspection by the TEGA.
Revised:  After a few days of troubleshooting, NASA looked back at the soil and discovered that , for an unknown reason, a large amount of soil fell through the screen and was ready for inspection by the TEGA.
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Original:  After a few days of troubleshooting, NASA looked back at the soil and discovered that  for an unknown reason, a large amount of soil fell through the screen and was ready for inspection by the TEGA.
Revised:  After a few days of troubleshooting, NASA looked back at the soil and discovered that for an unknown reason, a large amount of soil had fallen through the screen and was ready for inspection by the TEGA.
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Original:  We're interested in learning what sort of chemical and mineral activity has caused the particles to clump and stick together," added Boynton .
Revised:  We're interested in learning what sort of chemical and mineral activity has caused the particles to clump and stick together," Boynton commented .
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Original:  It had been rescheduled to take reading of the Martian climate such as temperature and wind speed, and also  analyze a soil sample using the optical microscope, or MECA (Microscopy, Electrochemistry, and Conductivity Analyzer) on June 12.
Revised:  It had been rescheduled to take readings of the Martian climate such as temperature and wind speed, and also analyze a soil sample using the optical microscope, or MECA (Microscopy, Electrochemistry, and Conductivity Analyzer) on June 12.
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Original:  It had been rescheduled to take reading of the Martian climate such as temperature and wind speed, and also  analyze a soil sample using the optical microscope, or MECA (Microscopy, Electrochemistry, and Conductivity Analyzer) on June 12.
Revised:  It had been rescheduled to take reading of the Martian climate such as temperature and wind speed, and also to analyze a soil sample using the optical microscope, or MECA (Microscopy, Electrochemistry, and Conductivity Analyzer) on June 12.
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Original:  Pictures and results from that sample are expected  on Thursday June 12, while the oven samples will take a few days to analyze.
Revised:  Pictures and results from that sample are expected to arrive on Thursday June 12, while the oven samples will take a few days to analyze.
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Original:  For reasons unknown to scientists, and after several seemingly unsuccessful attempts to break up the soil, a large amount was discovered to have passed though a screen leading to an on board oven.
Revised:  For reasons unknown to scientists, and after several seemingly unsuccessful attempts to break up the soil, a large amount was discovered to have passed through a screen leading to an on board oven.
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Original:  The ground moved," said Phoenix co-investigator Bill Boynton, a researcher at the University of Arizona located in Tuscon , Arizona.
Revised:  The ground moved," said Phoenix co-investigator Bill Boynton, a researcher at the University of Arizona located in Tucson , Arizona.
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Original:  The 37-year old victim was walking in downtown Vancouver, east on Davie Street, an area with most of the city's gay clubs and bars.
Revised:  The 37-year-old victim was walking in downtown Vancouver, east on Davie Street, an area with most of the city's gay clubs and bars.
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Original:  They depict three males, estimated to be between 18- and 20-years old, purchasing eggs just prior to the incident.
Revised:  They depict three males, estimated to be between 18 and 20 years old, purchasing eggs just prior to the incident.
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Original:  People are being urged to come forward with any information about the identity of the suspects  
Revised:  People are being urged to come forward with any information about the identity of the suspects . 
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Original:  People are being urged to come forward with any information about the identity of the suspects  
Revised:  People are being urged to come forward with any information about the identity of the suspects One of the suspects in the crime. One of the suspects in the crime. One of the suspects in the crime
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Original:  They depict three males, estimated to be between 18 and 20 years old, purchasing eggs just prior to the incident.
Revised:  They depict three males, estimated to be betwe<math>en 18 and 20 years old, purchasing eggs just prior to the incident.
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Original:  They depict three males, estimated to be betwe<math>en 18 and 20 years old, purchasing eggs just prior to the incident.
Revised:  They depict three males, estimated to be between 18 and 20 years old, purchasing eggs just prior to the incident.
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Original:  The current law has attracted critisism in the last few years for discriminating against lesbians and homosexuals, as they were denied the right to marriage as well as to adopt children, or use wikipedia: assisted reproductive technology.
Revised:  The current law has attracted critisism in the last few years for discriminating against lesbians and homosexuals, as they were denied the right to marriage as well as to adopt children, or use assisted reproductive technology.
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Original:  However, the new law does not require wikipedia: The Church of Norway to marry homosexuals or lesbians, but it allows ministers to perform this service if the national church council allows for it.
Revised:  However, the new law does not require The Church of Norway to marry homosexuals or lesbians, but it allows ministers to perform this service if the national church council allows for it.
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Original:  The current law has attracted critisism in the last few years for discriminating against lesbians and homosexuals, as they were denied the right to marriage as well as to adopt children, or use assisted reproductive technology.
Revised:  The current law has attracted criticism in the last few years for discriminating against lesbians and homosexuals, as they were denied the right to marriage as well as to adopt children, or use assisted reproductive technology.
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Original:  The new law as proposed allowes marriages between homosexuals and lesbians, granting them the same rights to religious services in connection with their marriage, as well as the right to adopt children with the same requirements being applied as to heterosexuals.
Revised:  The new law as proposed allows marriages between homosexuals and lesbians, granting them the same rights to religious services in connection with their marriage, as well as the right to adopt children with the same requirements being applied as to heterosexuals.
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Original: The new law as proposed allows marriages between homosexuals and lesbians, granting them the same rights to religious services in connection with their marriage, as well as the right to adopt children with the same requirements being applied as to heterosexuals.
Revised: The new law , as proposed, allows marriages between homosexuals and lesbians, granting them the same rights to religious services in connection with their marriage, as well as the right to adopt children with the same requirements being applied as to heterosexuals.
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Original: The Norwegian national assembly voted Wednesday for a change in the existing marriage and adoption laws.
Revised: The Norwegian national assembly voted Wednesday to change the existing marriage and adoption laws.
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Original:  After having debated for several hours, the vote resulted in  84 : 41 representatives in favor of the new laws, which amongst others allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
Revised:  After debating for several hours, the vote resulted in 84 : 41 representatives in favor of the new laws, which amongst others allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
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Original:  After having debated for several hours, the vote resulted in  84 : 41 representatives in favor of the new laws, which amongst others allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
Revised:  After having debated for several hours, the vote resulted in a 84 : 41 representatives in favor of the new laws, which amongst others allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
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Original:  After having debated for several hours, the vote resulted in  84 : 41 representatives in favor of the new laws, which amongst others allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
Revised:  After having debated for several hours, the vote resulted in 84 to 41 representatives in favor of the new laws, which amongst others allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
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Original:  After having debated for several hours, the vote resulted in  84 : 41 representatives in favor of the new laws, which amongst others allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
Revised:  After having debated for several hours, the vote resulted in 84 : 41 majority in favor of the new laws, which amongst others allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
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Original:  After having debated for several hours, the vote resulted in  84 : 41 representatives in favor of the new laws, which amongst others allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
Revised:  After having debated for several hours, the vote resulted in 84 : 41 representatives in favor of the new law which allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
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Original:  The current law has attracted criticism in the last few years for discriminating against lesbians and homosexuals, as they were denied the right to marriageas well as to adopt children, or use assisted reproductive technology.
Revised:  The existing law attracted criticism in the last few years for discriminating against lesbians and homosexuals, as they were denied the right to marriageas well as to adopt children, or use assisted reproductive technology.
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Original:  The current law has attracted criticism in the last few years for discriminating against lesbians and homosexuals, as they were denied the right to marriageas well as to adopt children, or use assisted reproductive technology.
Revised:  The current law has attracted criticism in the last few years for discriminating against lesbians and homosexuals, as they were denied marriage, adoption, and the use of assisted reproductive technology.
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Original:  The new law also allow lesbian couples to use assisted reproductive technology.
Revised:  The new law also allows lesbian couples to use assisted reproductive technology.
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Original:  However, the new law does not require The Church of Norway to marry homosexuals or lesbians, but it allows ministers to perform this service if the national church council allows for it.
Revised:  The new law does not require The Church of Norway to marry homosexuals or lesbians, but it allows ministers to perform this service if the national church council allows for it.
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Original:  Also, a  part of the new proposal failed to gain a majority during the vote , which would have disclosed the identity of sperm donors  . Citing the right for children to know their biological parents as more important, a majority of the representatives voted against this part of the proposal
Revised:  Also, a Another part of the new proposal failed to gain a majority during the vote , which would have disclosed the identity of sperm donors . Citing the right for children to know their biological parents as more important, a majority of the representatives voted against this part of the proposal
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Original:  Also, a  part of the new proposal failed to gain a majority during the vote , which would have disclosed the identity of sperm donors  . Citing the right for children to know their biological parents as more important, a majority of the representatives voted against this part of the proposal
Revised:  Also, a part of the new proposal , which would have disclosed the identity of sperm donors . Citing the right for children to know their biological parents as more important, a majority of the representatives voted against this part of the proposal
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Original:  Also, a  part of the new proposal failed to gain a majority during the vote , which would have disclosed the identity of sperm donors  . Citing the right for children to know their biological parents as more important, a majority of the representatives voted against this part of the proposal
Revised:  Also, a part of the new proposal failed to gain a majority during the vote , which would have disclosed the identity of sperm donors , failed to gain a majority during the vote . Citing the right for children to know their biological parents as more important, a majority of the representatives voted against this part of the proposal
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Original:  After debating for several hours, the vote resulted in a 84 to 41 majority in favor of the new law which allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
Revised:  After debating for several hours, the vote resulted in a 84 to 41 majority in favour of the new law which allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
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Original:  After debating for several hours, the vote resulted in a 84 to 41 majority in favor of the new law which allows lesbians and gays to marry and adopt children.
Revised:  After debating for several hours, the vote resulted in a 84 to 41 majority in favor of the new law which allows homosexual couples to marry and adopt children.
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Original:  The existing law attracted criticism in the last few years for discriminating against lesbians and homosexuals, as they were denied marriage, adoption, and the use of assisted reproductive technology.
Revised:  The existing law attracted criticism in the last few years for discriminating against homosexuals, as they were denied marriage, adoption, and the use of assisted reproductive technology.
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Original:  The new law, as proposed, allows marriages between homosexuals and lesbians , granting them the same rights to religious services in connection with their marriage, as well as the right to adopt children with the same requirements being applied as to heterosexuals.
Revised:  The new law, as proposed, allows marriages between homosexuals , granting them the same rights to religious services in connection with their marriage, as well as the right to adopt children with the same requirements being applied as to heterosexuals.
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Original:  The new law does not require The Church of Norway to marry homosexuals or lesbians, but it allows ministers to perform this service if the national church council permits it.
Revised:  The new law does not require The Church of Norway to marry gays or lesbians, but it allows ministers to perform this service if the national church council permits it.
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Original: Another part of the new proposal, which would have disclosed the identity of sperm donors, failed to gain a majority during the vote.
Revised: Another part of the new proposal, which would have concealed the identity of sperm donors, failed to gain a majority during the vote.
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Original: Portugal took an early lead in minute eight when Deco scored after two attempts.
Revised: Portugal took an early lead in minute eight when scored after two attempts.
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Original:  Regulation time ended, and three minutes were added, giving the Czechs a chance to equal the score, but all hope was lost when Quaresma scored one minute later, after receiving a pass from Ronaldo.
Revised:  Regulation time ended, and three minutes were added, giving the Czechs a chance to equal the score, but all hope was lost when scored one minute later, after receiving a pass from Ronaldo.
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Original:  The score was equalled by the Czechs in minute 17 when Sionko headed in from a corner.
Revised:  The score was equalled by the Czechs in minute 17 when headed in from a corner.
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Original:  A spokesman for the Boy Scouts of America'  Mid American Council, the region in which the camp was situated, has stated that storm activated sirens but she couldn't confirm whether the scouts were staying in tents or buildings.
Revised:  A spokesman for the Boy Scouts of America' s Mid American Council, the region in which the camp was situated, has stated that storm activated sirens but she couldn't confirm whether the scouts were staying in tents or buildings.
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Original:  A major storm suspected to be a tornado has reportedly killed four Boy Scouts camping at the Little Sioux Scout Camp in Little Sioux, Iowa.
Revised: DES MOINES, Iowa, - A major storm suspected to be a tornado has reportedly killed four Boy Scouts camping at the Little Sioux Scout Camp in Little Sioux, Iowa.
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Original:  Ninety-six Scouts aged thirteen to eighteen and twenty-five adult staff members were believed to be camping at the time the alarm was raised.
Revised:  Roughly ninety-five Scouts aged thirteen to eighteen and twenty-five adult staff members were believed to be camping at the time the alarm was raised.
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Original:  The Scouts were participating in a training exercise at the 1,800 acre ranch roughly 40 miles northeast of Omaha, NE. A spokesperson for Iowa Homeland Security  stated that the camp was littered with debris and downed tree branches after being struck by a tornado at or around 7:00 PM Central Daylight Time.
Revised:  The Scouts were participating in a training exercise at the 1,800 acre ranch roughly 40 miles northeast of Omaha, NE. A spokesperson for Iowa Homeland Security , stated that the camp was littered with debris and downed tree branches after being struck by a tornado at or around 7:00 PM Central Daylight Time.
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Original: DES MOINES, Iowa, - A major storm suspected to be a tornado has reportedly killed four Boy Scouts camping at the Little Sioux Scout Camp in Little Sioux, Iowa.
Revised:  A major storm suspected to be a tornado has reportedly killed four Boy Scouts camping at the Little Sioux Scout Camp in Little Sioux, Iowa.
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Original:  Most of the scouts were from Omaha-Metro Area, including Omaha and Bellevue, NE and Council Bluffs IA .
Revised:  Most of the scouts were from Omaha-Metro Area, including Omaha and Bellevue, Nebraska and Council Bluffs IA .
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Original:  Most of the scouts were from Omaha-Metro Area, including Omaha and Bellevue, NE and Council Bluffs IA .
Revised:  Most of the scouts were from Omaha-Metro Area, including Omaha and Bellevue, NE and Council Bluffs , Iowa .
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