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Original:  During this time , Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 hostages being held in Iran in 1981, an act which earned him the highest award in the US, The Presidential Medal of Freedom .
Revised:  During this time , Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 hostages being held in Iran in 1981, an act which earned him the highest award in the US, the .
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Original:  It was while Christopher was Secretary of State under Bill Clinton that he became known for his efforts to bring peace to countries split by war, especially in the Middle East and with more success in the former Yugoslavia, where his work with Bosnian Muslims, Serbs and Croats bought around an end to the war there, and the brokering of the Dayton peace accords in 1995.
Revised:  It was while Christopher was Secretary of State , Christopher became well-known for his efforts to bring peace to countries split by war, especially in the Middle East and with more success in the former Yugoslavia, where his work with Bosnian Muslims, Serbs and Croats bought around an end to the war there, and the brokering of the Dayton peace accords in 1995.
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Original:  It was while Christopher was Secretary of State under Bill Clinton that he became known for his efforts to bring peace to countries split by war, especially in the Middle East and with more success in the former Yugoslavia, where his work with Bosnian Muslims, Serbs and Croats bought around an end to the war there, and the brokering of the Dayton peace accords in 1995.
Revised:  It was while Christopher was Secretary of State under Bill Clinton that he became known for his efforts to bring peace to countries divided by war, especially in the Middle East and with more success in the former Yugoslavia, where his work with Bosnian Muslims, Serbs and Croats bought around an end to the war there, and the brokering of the Dayton peace accords in 1995.
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Original:  It was while Christopher was Secretary of State under Bill Clinton that he became known for his efforts to bring peace to countries split by war, especially in the Middle East and with more success in the former Yugoslavia, where his work with Bosnian Muslims, Serbs and Croats bought around an end to the war there, and the brokering of the Dayton peace accords in 1995.
Revised:  It was while Christopher was Secretary of State under Bill Clinton that he became known for his efforts to bring peace to countries split by war, especially in the Middle East and with more success in the former Yugoslavia, where his work with Bosnian Muslims, Serbs , and Croats brought around an end to the war there, and the brokering of the Dayton peace accords in 1995.
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Original:  It was while Christopher was Secretary of State under Bill Clinton that he became known for his efforts to bring peace to countries split by war, especially in the Middle East and with more success in the former Yugoslavia, where his work with Bosnian Muslims, Serbs and Croats bought around an end to the war there, and the brokering of the Dayton peace accords in 1995.
Revised:  It was while Christopher was Secretary of State under Bill Clinton that he became known for his efforts to bring peace to countries split by war, especially in the Middle East and with more success in the former Yugoslavia, where his work with Bosnian Muslims, Serbs and Croats bought around an end to the war there, as well as the brokering of the Dayton peace accords in 1995.
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Original:  Christopher also had the distinction of being the most travelled Secretary of State in office , notching up a record 704,487 miles by 1996, something which the crew of his USAF aircraft felt was appropriate to celebrate, and they did so by presenting him with a cake onboard one of his flights.
Revised:  Christopher also held the distinction of being the most travelled Secretary of State in office , notching up a record 704,487 miles by 1996, something which the crew of his USAF aircraft felt was appropriate to celebrate, and they did so by presenting him with a cake onboard one of his flights.
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Original:  Christopher also had the distinction of being the most travelled Secretary of State in office , notching up a record 704,487 miles by 1996, something which the crew of his USAF aircraft felt was appropriate to celebrate, and they did so by presenting him with a cake onboard one of his flights.
Revised:  Christopher also had the distinction of being the most travelled Secretary of State in history , notching up a record 704,487 miles by 1996, something which the crew of his USAF aircraft felt was appropriate to celebrate, and they did so by presenting him with a cake onboard one of his flights.
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Original:  Christopher also had the distinction of being the most travelled Secretary of State in office , notching up a record 704,487 miles by 1996, something which the crew of his USAF aircraft felt was appropriate to celebrate, and they did so by presenting him with a cake onboard one of his flights.
Revised:  Christopher also had the distinction of being the most travelled Secretary of State in office , notching up a record 704,487 miles by 1996, a milestone celebrated by his crew who presented him with a cake onboard one of his flights.
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Original:  His floor wasn't just limited to diplomacy,  Christopher also had a legal background, studying law and practising in Los Angeles, California .
Revised:  Christopher's career wasn't just limited to diplomacy, Christopher also had a legal background, studying law and practising in Los Angeles, California .
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Original:  His floor wasn't just limited to diplomacy,  Christopher also had a legal background, studying law and practising in Los Angeles, California .
Revised:  His floor wasn't limited to diplomacy, Christopher also had a legal background, studying law and practising in Los Angeles, California .
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Original:  His floor wasn't just limited to diplomacy,  Christopher also had a legal background, studying law and practising in Los Angeles, California .
Revised:  His floor wasn't just limited to diplomacy, however, Christopher also had a legal background, studying law and practising in Los Angeles, California .
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Original:  His floor wasn't just limited to diplomacy,  Christopher also had a legal background, studying law and practising in Los Angeles, California .
Revised:  His floor wasn't just limited to diplomacy, Christopher also had a legal background, studying law and practicing in .
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Original:  He had the job of chairing the commission into the Rodney King assault, and the riots which followed on from it.
Revised:  He had the job of chairing the investigation into the Rodney King assault, and the riots which followed on from it.
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Original:  He served on the Hate Crimes taskforce in Californiaalso .
Revised:  He served on the Hate Crimes task force in California .
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Original:  Mr  Christopher is survived by his wife, 4 children and 5 grandchildren
Revised:  Mr . Christopher is survived by his wife, 4 children and 5 grandchildren
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Original:  His family said the death was a result of his battle with Kidney and Bladder cancer.
Revised:  His family announced the death as result of complications with Kidney and Bladder cancer.
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Original:  While working for Carter, Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 Americans who were being held hostages in Iran in 1981, which earned him the most prestigious diplomatic award in the US, the .
Revised:  While working for Carter, Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 Americans who were being held hostages in Iran in 1981, an act him the most prestigious diplomatic award in the US, the .
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Original:  While working for Carter, Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 Americans who were being held hostages in Iran in 1981, an act  him the most prestigious diplomatic award in the US, the .
Revised:  While working for Carter, Christopher earned his reputation as a negotiator, securing the release of 52 Americans who were being held hostages in Iran in 1981, an act that earned him the most prestigious diplomatic award in the US, the .
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Original:  Minutes later, assisted Ronaldo, and he scored the record breaking goal in the bottom right corner.
Revised:  Minutes later, assisted Ronaldo, and he scored the record-breaking goal in the bottom right corner.
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Original:  The first half ended in 2–0.
Revised:  The first half ended 2–0.
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Original:  At the beginning of  second half, was substituted in for .
Revised:  At the beginning of the second half, was substituted in for .
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Original:  At the beginning of  second half, was substituted in for .
Revised:  At the beginning of second half, was substituted for .
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Original:  Real is now on the top of Liga table.
Revised:  Real is now top of the La Liga table.
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Original: Döerflein himself died in September 2008 of heart attack.
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Original:  Knut has been featured on magazine covers , merchandise, and doubled the attendance at the zoo, according to Zoo officials.
Revised:  Knut has been featured on magazine covers and merchandise, and doubled the attendance at the zoo, according to Zoo officials.
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Original: A house fire in Bristol, England has caused the deaths of two children , both of which were below the age of ten.
Revised: A house fire has caused the deaths of two children , both of which were below the age of ten.
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Original:  The and services were also called to the scene   
Revised:  The and services were also called to the scene . 
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Original: A house fire  has caused the deaths of two children in Bristol, England . Both of the two individuals were below the age of ten and were brothers.
Revised: A house fire in Bristol, England has caused the deaths of two children in Bristol, England . Both of the two individuals were below the age of ten and were brothers.
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Original:   "   A full investigation has been launched by the police and fire investigators.
Revised:  " " A full investigation has been launched by the police and fire investigators.
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Original:  No formal identification has yet taken place," 's Detective Sergeant Simon Chubb  stated
Revised:  No formal identification has yet taken place," 's Detective Sergeant Simon Chubb has stated
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Original:  Both of the two individuals were below the age of ten and were brothers .
Revised:  Emergency services were called to the scene in the early hours of Saturday morning .
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Original:  Their bodies were discovered by , who had arrived at the scene of the fire in the suburb of at approximately 0630 on Saturday.
Revised:  The bodies were discovered by , who had arrived at the scene of the fire in the suburb of at approximately 0630 on Saturday.
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Original:  Their bodies were discovered by , who had arrived at the scene of the fire in the suburb of at approximately 0630 on Saturday.
Revised:  Their bodies were discovered by , at the scene of the fire in the suburb of at approximately 0630 on Saturday.
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Original:  Their bodies were discovered by , who had arrived at the scene of the fire in the suburb of at approximately 0630 on Saturday.
Revised:  Their bodies were discovered by , who had arrived at the scene in the suburb of at approximately 0630 on Saturday.
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Original:  Their bodies were discovered by , who had arrived at the scene of the fire in the suburb of at approximately 0630 on Saturday.
Revised:  Their bodies were discovered by , who had arrived at the scene of the fire in the suburb of around 0630 on Saturday.
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Original:  Before their arrival, three other children and two adults managed to survive the incident by escaping from the building in Merryweather Close via the windows.
Revised:  Before their arrival, three other children and two adults escaped from the building in Merryweather Close via the windows.
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Original:  Before their arrival, three other children and two adults managed to survive the incident by escaping from the building in Merryweather Close via the windows.
Revised:  Before their arrival, three other children and two adults managed to survive the incident by escaping from the building in Merryweather Close through windows.
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Original:  No formal identification has yet taken place," 's Detective Sergeant Simon Chubb has stated
Revised:  No formal identification has yet taken place," 's Detective Sergeant Simon Chubb stated
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Original: According to Roberts, smoke alarms were into the building, however the damage was "so extensive" that it is uncertain as to whether or not they were functioning correctly.
Revised: According to Roberts, smoke alarms were in the building, however the damage was "so extensive" that it is uncertain as to whether or not they were functioning correctly.
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Original: However, Martelly has waged an energetic, well financed campaign with pink campaign posters picturing his smiling face and bald head, cultivating a populist image with Haiti’s poor.
Revised: However, Martelly has waged an energetic, well financed campaign with pink campaign posters picturing his smiling face and bald head, cultivating a image with Haiti’s poor.
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Original:  He has been successful at courting the upper class with a platform containing pro-business promises and support for the return of the , while simultaneously marketing himself as an unpretentious outsider who will shake up the political system and yank the country out of its paralysis. 
Revised:  He has been successful at marketing himself as an unpretentious outsider who will shake up the political system and yank the country out of its paralysis. 
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Original:  He noted that this puts tremendous pressure on the winner to produce results quickly in a world where the price of food and fuel is rising  
Revised:  He noted that this puts tremendous pressure on the winner to produce results quickly in a world where the price of food and fuel is rising . 
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Original:  Colin Granderson, head of OAS observer mission, said the runoff election was a great improvement over the previous one
Revised:  Colin Granderson, head of (OAS) observer mission, said the runoff election was a great improvement over the previous one
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Original:  Colin Granderson, head of (OAS) observer mission, said the runoff election was a great improvement over the previous one  
Revised:  Colin Granderson, head of (OAS) observer mission, said the runoff election was a great improvement over the previous one . 
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Original: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: ,  70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star ,  50 of whom the reported: " As a popular singer , Martelly was famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
Revised: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: , age 70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star , 50 of whom the reported: " As a popular singer , Martelly was famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
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Original: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: ,  70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star ,  50 of whom the reported: " As a popular singer , Martelly was famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
Revised: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: , 70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star , age 50 of whom the reported: " As a popular singer , Martelly was famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
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Original: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: ,  70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star ,  50 of whom the reported: " As a popular singer , Martelly was famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
Revised: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: , 70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star , 50 , who the described as being " As a popular singer , Martelly was famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
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Original: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: ,  70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star ,  50 of whom the reported: " As a popular singer , Martelly was famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
Revised: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: , 70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star , 50 of whom the reported: " a popular singer , Martelly was famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
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Original: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: ,  70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star ,  50 of whom the reported: " As a popular singer , Martelly was famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
Revised: Out of the original 19 candidates, two remained after the first round: , 70, a sedate, reserved university professor and wife of former president , and pop star , 50 of whom the reported: " As a popular singer ... famous for dropping his pants on stage, mooning audiences, and dressing in — or sometimes a diaper."
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Original:  At the same time, he has courted the upper class with a platform containing pro-business promises and support for the return of the , The determining factor may be the popular former president  who returned two days ago to Haiti from South America after seven years in exile.
Revised:  At the same time, he has courted the upper class with a platform containing pro-business promises and support for the return of the . The determining factor may be the popular former president who returned two days ago to Haiti from South America after seven years in exile.
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Original:  At the same time, he has courted the upper class with a platform containing pro-business promises and support for the return of the , The determining factor may be the popular former president  who returned two days ago to Haiti from South America after seven years in exile.
Revised:  At the same time, he has courted the upper class with a platform containing pro-business promises and support for the return of the , The determining factor may be the popular former president , who returned two days ago to Haiti from South America after seven years in exile.
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Original:  Humperdink was diagnosed with bladder cancer earlier in the year  died after complications with pneumoni
Revised:  Humperdink was diagnosed with bladder cancer earlier in the year and died after complications with pneumoni
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Original:  During his career he worked within several wrestling companies including World Wrestling Federation, World Championship Wrestling and Florida Championship Wrestlin 
Revised:  During his career he worked within several wrestling companies including World Wrestling Federation, World Championship Wrestling and Florida Championship Wrestling. 
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Original:  After establishing a relationship with some of the wrestlers he became the manager of The Hollywood Blonds tag team during the 1960'  
Revised:  After establishing a relationship with some of the wrestlers he became the manager of The Hollywood Blonds tag team during the 1960' s. 
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Original:  After he left the WWF he joined World Championship Wrestling but retired soon afte 
Revised:  After he left the WWF he joined World Championship Wrestling but retired soon after. 
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Original:  May his soul rest in the arms of our Lord 
Revised:  May his soul rest in the arms of our Lord .
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Original: "It's not important what the result is, it's important that it was fair," said a revolutionary leader, Abdul Rahman Yusuf .
Revised: "It's not important what the result is, it's important that it was fair," said a revolutionary leader, Abdul Rahman Yusuf 
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Original: Many of the mostly protest leaders who headed the leading to 's resignation were opposed  the amendments, not wanting to hold elections so quickly.
Revised: Many of the mostly protest leaders who headed the leading to 's resignation were opposed to the amendments, not wanting to hold elections so quickly.
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Original: Traditional owners maintain anti-dump stance: The traditional owners of a proposed national nuclear waste dump  site in the Arrernte Nation Central Australia say they will continue to protest against the facility.
Revised:  The traditional owners of a proposed national nuclear waste dump site in the Arrernte Nation Central Australia say they will continue to protest against the facility.
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Original: Traditional owners maintain anti-dump stance: The traditional owners of a proposed national nuclear waste dump  site in the Arrernte Nation Central Australia say they will continue to protest against the facility.
Revised: Traditional owners maintain anti-dump stance: A protest against a proposed nuclear waste dump site in the Arrernte Nation Central Australia say they will continue to protest against the facility.
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Original: Traditional owners maintain anti-dump stance: The traditional owners of a proposed national nuclear waste dump  site in the Arrernte Nation Central Australia say they will continue to protest against the facility.
Revised: Traditional owners maintain anti-dump stance: The traditional owners of a proposed national nuclear waste dump site in the Arrernte Nation say they will continue to protest against the facility.
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Original:  The Medical Association for Prevention of War condemned as "scaremongering" the claims by Federal MPs that the health of Australians would be in jeopardy if a nuclear waste dump was not imposed on the Northern Territory by the Commonwealth Government...
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Original:  The sites under review are: Fishers Ridge, a defence site 42km south-east of Katherine.
Revised:  Fishers Ridge, a defence site 42km south-east of Katherine.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The announcement has broken an election promise, with Environment Minister, Ian Campbell, stating in the leadup to the election: "The Commonwealth is not pursuing any options anywhere on the mainland ...
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The Commonwealth is not pursuing any options anywhere on the mainland ...
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Original:  The Australian government has abandoned locating the dump in South Australia and Western Australia following local opposition.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A final decision is expected to be made by the end of 2006, with the preferred site to be operational by 2011.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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