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Original:  Phot. 51; Plin. vi. 1, who erroneously states that Heracleia was situated on (appositum) the river.)
Revised:  Phot. 51; Plin. vi. 1, who erroneously states that Heraclea was situated on (appositum) the river.)
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Original:  It flowed in the east of Bithynia in a westerly direction, and empties itself into the Black Sea (Pontus Euxinus) a little to the south of Heraclea Pontica, which was twenty stadia distant from it.
Revised:  It flowed in the east of Bithynia in a westerly direction, and emptied itself into the Black Sea (Pontus Euxinus) a little to the south of Heraclea Pontica, which was twenty stadia distant from it.
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Original: Pattern Deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the Total Deviation plot.
Revised: total Deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the Total Deviation plot.
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Original: Total Deviation The numerical total demonstrates the difference between measured values and population age-norm values at specific retinal points.
Revised: pattern Deviation The numerical total demonstrates the difference between measured values and population age-norm values at specific retinal points.
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Original: total Deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the Total Deviation plot.
Revised: pattern Deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the Total Deviation plot.
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Original: pattern Deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the Total Deviation plot.
Revised: Pattern Deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the Total Deviation plot.
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Original: pattern Deviation The numerical total demonstrates the difference between measured values and population age-norm values at specific retinal points.
Revised: Total Deviation The numerical total demonstrates the difference between measured values and population age-norm values at specific retinal points.
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Original:  These indices include: Fixation Losses : Recorded when a patient responds to a stimulus that is projected on to area of their blind spot.
Revised:  These indices include: Fixation losses : Recorded when a patient responds to a stimulus that is projected on to area of their blind spot.
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Original:  Fixation losses exceeding 20\%, are denoted with an 'XX' next to the score, and deems results unreliable False Positives : Recorded when a patient responds when there is no stimulus present.
Revised:  Fixation losses exceeding 20\%, are denoted with an 'XX' next to the score, and deems results unreliable False positives : Recorded when a patient responds when there is no stimulus present.
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Original:  This may indicate that the patient is anxious and concerned about missing targets False Negatives : Recorded when a patient does not respond to brighter stimuli where a duller stimulus has already been seen.
Revised:  This may indicate that the patient is anxious and concerned about missing targets False negatives : Recorded when a patient does not respond to brighter stimuli where a duller stimulus has already been seen.
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Original:  Numerical Display The numerical display represents raw values of patient's retinal sensitivity at specific retinal points in dB.
Revised:  Numerical display The numerical display represents raw values of patient's retinal sensitivity at specific retinal points in dB.
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Original:  Grey Scale The grey scale is a graphical representation of the numerical display, allowing for easy interpretation of the field loss.
Revised:  Grey scale The grey scale is a graphical representation of the numerical display, allowing for easy interpretation of the field loss.
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Original:  Total Deviation The numerical total demonstrates the difference between measured values and population age-norm values at specific retinal points.
Revised:  Total deviation The numerical total demonstrates the difference between measured values and population age-norm values at specific retinal points.
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Original:  The Total Deviation plots highlight diffuse vision loss (i.e. the total departure from the age-norm).
Revised:  The total deviation plots highlight diffuse vision loss (i.e. the total departure from the age-norm).
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Original:  Pattern Deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the Total Deviation plot.
Revised:  Pattern deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the Total Deviation plot.
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Original:  Pattern Deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the Total Deviation plot.
Revised:  Pattern Deviation The pattern deviation provides a numerical total and statistical display as the total deviation plot.
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Original:  The Pattern Deviation plot is generally lighter than the Total Deviation because of the factors accounted for.
Revised:  The pattern deviation plot is generally lighter than the Total Deviation because of the factors accounted for.
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Original:  The Pattern Deviation plot is generally lighter than the Total Deviation because of the factors accounted for.
Revised:  The Pattern Deviation plot is generally lighter than the total deviation because of the factors accounted for.
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Original:  Global Indices Figure 5 - Types of Visual Field Defects (right eye)A: Central scotomaB: Centrocaecal scotomaC: Nasal Step D: Superior Arcuate E: Nasal Wedge defect F: Superior Nasal quadrantanopia G: Superior Altitudinal H: Nasal hemianopia I: Enlarged Blind Spot with Paracentral scotoma located 15 degrees superiorly These provide a statistical summary of the field with one number.
Revised:  Global indices Figure 5 - Types of Visual Field Defects (right eye)A: Central scotomaB: Centrocaecal scotomaC: Nasal Step D: Superior Arcuate E: Nasal Wedge defect F: Superior Nasal quadrantanopia G: Superior Altitudinal H: Nasal hemianopia I: Enlarged Blind Spot with Paracentral scotoma located 15 degrees superiorly These provide a statistical summary of the field with one number.
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Original:  They include: Mean Deviation (MD): Derived from the Total Deviation and represents the overall mean departure from the age-corrected norm.
Revised:  They include: Mean deviation (MD): Derived from the Total Deviation and represents the overall mean departure from the age-corrected norm.
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Original:  They include: Mean Deviation (MD): Derived from the Total Deviation and represents the overall mean departure from the age-corrected norm.
Revised:  They include: Mean Deviation (MD): Derived from the total deviation and represents the overall mean departure from the age-corrected norm.
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Original:  For example, P <2\% means that less than 2\% of the population have vision loss worse than measured Pattern Standard Deviation (PSD): Derived from the Pattern Deviation and thus highlights focal loss only.
Revised:  For example, P <2\% means that less than 2\% of the population have vision loss worse than measured Pattern standard deviation (PSD): Derived from the Pattern Deviation and thus highlights focal loss only.
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Original:  For example, P <2\% means that less than 2\% of the population have vision loss worse than measured Pattern Standard Deviation (PSD): Derived from the Pattern Deviation and thus highlights focal loss only.
Revised:  For example, P <2\% means that less than 2\% of the population have vision loss worse than measured Pattern Standard Deviation (PSD): Derived from the pattern deviation and thus highlights focal loss only.
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Original:  A high PSD, indicating irregular vision, is therefore a more useful indicator of glaucomatous progression, than the MD Glaucoma Hemifield Test (GHT) The Glaucoma Hemifield Test (GHT) provides assessment of the visual field where glaucomatous damage is often seen.
Revised:  A high PSD, indicating irregular vision, is therefore a more useful indicator of glaucomatous progression, than the MD Glaucoma hemifield test The glaucoma hemifield test (GHT) provides assessment of the visual field where glaucomatous damage is often seen.
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Original:  Visual Field Index  (VFI) The VFI reflects retinal ganglion cell loss and function, as a percentage, with central points weighted more.
Revised:  Visual Field Index (VFI) reflects retinal ganglion cell loss and function, as a percentage, with central points weighted more.
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Original:  The shaded pattern of vision loss provided on the Pattern Deviation plot allows for diagnosis of the type of vision loss present.
Revised:  The shaded pattern of vision loss provided on the pattern deviation plot allows for diagnosis of the type of vision loss present.
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Original:  The Mountainous Republic of the Northern Caucasus was created from parts of  Kuban and Terek Oblasts by the indigenous nationalities after the Russian Revolution;
Revised:  The Mountainous Republic of the Northern Caucasus was created from parts of the Kuban and Terek Oblasts by the indigenous nationalities after the Russian Revolution;
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Original: The Mountain Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic or Mountain ASSR () was a short-lived autonomous republic within the Russian SFSR in the Northern Caucasus that existed from January 20 , 1921, to July 7 , 1924.
Revised: The Mountain Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic or Mountain ASSR () was a short-lived autonomous republic within the Russian SFSR in the Northern Caucasus that existed from 20 , 1921, to July 7 , 1924.
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Original: The Mountain Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic or Mountain ASSR () was a short-lived autonomous republic within the Russian SFSR in the Northern Caucasus that existed from January 20 , 1921, to July 7 , 1924.
Revised: The Mountain Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic or Mountain ASSR () was a short-lived autonomous republic within the Russian SFSR in the Northern Caucasus that existed from January 20 , 1921, to 7 , 1924.
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Original:  Already on September 1 , 1921, Kabardin Okrug was split from the ASSR as separate Kabardin Autonomous Okrug, subordinated directly to the RSFSR. Next came Karachay Okrug, which was transformed into Karachay Autonomous Okrug on January 12 , 1922;
Revised:  Already on 1 , 1921, Kabardin Okrug was split from the ASSR as separate Kabardin Autonomous Okrug, subordinated directly to the RSFSR. Next came Karachay Okrug, which was transformed into Karachay Autonomous Okrug on January 12 , 1922;
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Original:  Already on September 1 , 1921, Kabardin Okrug was split from the ASSR as separate Kabardin Autonomous Okrug, subordinated directly to the RSFSR. Next came Karachay Okrug, which was transformed into Karachay Autonomous Okrug on January 12 , 1922;
Revised:  Already on September 1 , 1921, Kabardin Okrug was split from the ASSR as separate Kabardin Autonomous Okrug, subordinated directly to the RSFSR. Next came Karachay Okrug, which was transformed into Karachay Autonomous Okrug on 12 , 1922;
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Original:  Balkar Okrug, which was transformed into Balkar Autonomous Okrug on January 16 , 1922;
Revised:  Balkar Okrug, which was transformed into Balkar Autonomous Okrug on 16 , 1922;
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Original:  and Chechen Okrug, which was transformed into the Chechen Autonomous Oblast on November 30 , 1922.
Revised:  and Chechen Okrug, which was transformed into the Chechen Autonomous Oblast on 30 , 1922.
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Original:  By the Decree of the VTsIK of July 7 , 1924, the remaining territory of the ASSR was partitioned into the North Ossetian Autonomous Oblast and the Ingush Autonomous Oblast.
Revised:  By the Decree of the VTsIK of 7 , 1924, the remaining territory of the ASSR was partitioned into the North Ossetian Autonomous Oblast and the Ingush Autonomous Oblast.
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Original:  The Sunzha Cossack Okrug and the city of Vladikavkaz were directly subordinated to the VTsIK until October 17 , 1924, when North Caucasus Krai was formed and integrated all of the former ASSR in addition to those two units.
Revised:  The Sunzha Cossack Okrug and the city of Vladikavkaz were directly subordinated to the VTsIK until 17 , 1924, when North Caucasus Krai was formed and integrated all of the former ASSR in addition to those two units.
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Original: The Mountain Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic or Mountain ASSR (  ) was a short-lived autonomous republic within the Russian SFSR in the Northern Caucasus that existed from 20 January 1921, to 7 July 1924.
Revised: The Mountain Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic or Mountain ASSR ( ; ) was a short-lived autonomous republic within the Russian SFSR in the Northern Caucasus that existed from 20 January 1921, to 7 July 1924.
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Original: Hyllus or Hyllos () – also, Phrygius – was the ancient name of a river of Asia Minor , a tributary of the river Hermus, in Lydia, flowing into Hermus from the north.
Revised: Hyllus or Hyllos () was the ancient name of a river of Asia Minor , a tributary of the river Hermus, in Lydia, flowing into Hermus from the north.
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Original: Hyllus or Hyllos () – also, Phrygius – was the ancient name of a river of Asia Minor , a tributary of the river Hermus, in Lydia, flowing into Hermus from the north.
Revised: Hyllus or Hyllos () – also, Phrygius – was the ancient name of a river of Asia Minor . It is a tributary of the river Hermus, in Lydia, flowing into Hermus from the north.
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Original:  Pliny  v. 31. ) In the time of Strabo (xiii. p. 626) the river was called Phrygius.  
Revised:  Pliny v. 31. In the time of Strabo (xiii. p. 626) the river was called Phrygius. 
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Original:  Pliny  v. 31. ) In the time of Strabo (xiii. p. 626) the river was called Phrygius.  
Revised:  Pliny v. 31. ) In the time of Strabo , the river was called Phrygius. 
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Original: Hyllus /Hyllos is also the name of a son of Heracles, see Hyllus.
Revised: Hyllus 
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Original:  Hyllus or Hyllos () was the ancient name of a river of Asia Minor.
Revised:  or Hyllos () was the ancient name of a river of Asia Minor.
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Original:  | | align="left" | Kia / NLEX | 23 || 16.8 || .385 || .296 || .737 || 1.6 || 1.6 || .5 || .1 || 6.0 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 33 || 21.2 || .404 || .328 || .730 || 2.2 || 1.2 || .4 || .2 || 7.8 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 7 || 9.2 || .320 || .250 || 1.000 || .9 || .7 || .0 || .0 || 3.4 |-class=sortbottom | align=center colspan=2 | Career | 84 || 16.3 || .388 || .319 || .708 || 1.6 || .9 || .3 || .2 || 5.8
Revised:  | | align="left" | Kia / NLEX | 23 || 16.8 || .385 || .296 || .737 || 1.5 || 1.6 || .5 || .1 || 6.0 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 33 || 21.2 || .404 || .328 || .730 || 2.2 || 1.2 || .4 || .2 || 7.8 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 7 || 9.2 || .320 || .250 || 1.000 || .9 || .7 || .0 || .0 || 3.4 |-class=sortbottom | align=center colspan=2 | Career | 84 || 16.3 || .388 || .319 || .708 || 1.6 || .9 || .3 || .2 || 5.8
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Original:  | | align="left" | Kia / NLEX | 23 || 16.8 || .385 || .296 || .737 || 1.6 || 1.6 || .5 || .1 || 6.0 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 33 || 21.2 || .404 || .328 || .730 || 2.2 || 1.2 || .4 || .2 || 7.8 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 7 || 9.2 || .320 || .250 || 1.000 || .9 || .7 || .0 || .0 || 3.4 |-class=sortbottom | align=center colspan=2 | Career | 84 || 16.3 || .388 || .319 || .708 || 1.6 || .9 || .3 || .2 || 5.8
Revised:  | | align="left" | Kia / NLEX | 23 || 16.8 || .385 || .296 || .737 || 1.6 || .9 || .5 || .1 || 6.0 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 33 || 21.2 || .404 || .328 || .730 || 2.2 || 1.2 || .4 || .2 || 7.8 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 7 || 9.2 || .320 || .250 || 1.000 || .9 || .7 || .0 || .0 || 3.4 |-class=sortbottom | align=center colspan=2 | Career | 84 || 16.3 || .388 || .319 || .708 || 1.6 || .9 || .3 || .2 || 5.8
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Original:  | | align="left" | Kia / NLEX | 23 || 16.8 || .385 || .296 || .737 || 1.5 || .9 || .5 || .1 || 6.0 |- | align="left" | | align="left"  | NLEX | 33 || 21.2 || .404 || .328 || .730 || 2.2 || 1.2 || .4 || .2 || 7.8 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 7 || 9.2 || .320 || .250 || 1.000 || .9 || .7 || .0 || .0 || 3.4 |-class=sortbottom | align=center colspan=2 | Career | 84 || 16.3 || .388 || .319 || .708 || 1.6 || .9 || .3 || .2 || 5.8
Revised:  | | align="left" | Kia / NLEX | 23 || 16.8 || .385 || .296 || .737 || 1.5 || .9 || .5 || .1 || 6.0 |- | align="left" | | align="left" | NLEX | 33 || 21.2 || .404 || .328 || .730 || 2.2 || 1.2 || .4 || .2 || 7.8 |- | align="left" | | 7 || 9.2 || .320 || .250 || 1.000 || .9 || .7 || .0 || .0 || 3.4 |-class=sortbottom | align=center colspan=2 | Career | 84 || 16.3 || .388 || .319 || .708 || 1.6 || .9 || .3 || .2 || 5.8
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Original:  She later opted to drop out of education to fully pursue a career in music.
Revised:  She later opted to drop out of school to fully pursue a career in music.
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Original:  2010–2012: Stepping into music scenery In 2010, Kimani performed a remix of Ice Prince's hit single "OLEKU" (remixed by Nathaniel Williams Jr.), which caught the attention of Chocolate City executive Ice Prince who she dated for 2 years.
Revised:  2010–2012: Stepping on to the music scene In 2010, Kimani performed a remix of Ice Prince's hit single "OLEKU" (remixed by Nathaniel Williams Jr.), which caught the attention of Chocolate City executive Ice Prince who she dated for 2 years.
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Original:  She has had several award nominations from the African music industry, and her singles are played in radio channels across Africa.
Revised:  She has recieved several award nominations from the African music industry, and her singles are played in radio channels across Africa.
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Original:  Her debut album was  in 2016.
Revised:  Her debut album was released in 2016.
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Original: Victoria Kimani (born 28 July 1985) is a Kenyan singer, songwriter, actress and entertainer previously signed to Nigerian record label Chocolate City  and was described as the record label's first lady.
Revised: Victoria Kimani (born 28 July 1985) is a Kenyan singer, songwriter, actress and entertainer previously signed to Nigerian record label Chocolate City , and was described as the record label's first lady.
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Original:  Her singing career has resulted in hits and she has what she called a 'weird' style but a 'focused' lifestyle.
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Original:  She has received several award nominations from the African music industry, and her singles are played in radio channels across Africa.
Revised:  She has received several award nominations from the African music industry, and her singles are played on radio channels across Africa.
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Original:  She has appeared in the film 7 Inch Curve , directed by Shola Thompson . Life and career Biography and music career Kimani was born in Los Angeles, California  to clergy parents.
Revised:  She has appeared in the film 7 Inch Curve . Life and career Biography and music career Kimani was born in Los Angeles, California to clergy parents.
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Original:  She has appeared in the film 7 Inch Curve , directed by Shola Thompson . Life and career Biography and music career Kimani was born in Los Angeles, California  to clergy parents.
Revised:  She has appeared in the film 7 Inch Curve , directed by Shola Thompson . Life and career Kimani was born in Los Angeles, California to clergy parents.
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Original:  She has appeared in the film 7 Inch Curve , directed by Shola Thompson . Life and career Biography and music career Kimani was born in Los Angeles, California  to clergy parents.
Revised:  She has appeared in the film 7 Inch Curve , directed by Shola Thompson . Life and career Biography and music career Kimani was born in Los Angeles, California , to clergy parents.
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Original:  She lived in Benin City, Nigeria  for two years, where her parents were doing missionary work.
Revised:  She lived in Benin City, Nigeria , for two years, where her parents were doing missionary work.
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Original:  She lived in Benin City, Nigeria  for two years, where her parents were doing missionary work.
Revised:  She lived in Benin City, Nigeria for two years, where her parents did missionary work.
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Original:  at age 16, she began performing alongside other church choir members as a back-up and writing songs for others.
Revised:  at age 16, she began performing alongside other church choir members as a back-up and wrote songs for others.
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Original:  2010–2012: Stepping on to the music scene In 2010, Kimani performed a remix of Ice Prince's hit single "OLEKU" (remixed by Nathaniel Williams Jr.), which caught the attention of Chocolate City executive Ice Prince  whom she dated for 2 years.
Revised:  In 2010, Kimani performed a remix of Ice Prince's hit single "OLEKU" (remixed by Nathaniel Williams Jr.), which caught the attention of Chocolate City executive Ice Prince whom she dated for 2 years.
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Original:  2010–2012: Stepping on to the music scene In 2010, Kimani performed a remix of Ice Prince's hit single "OLEKU" (remixed by Nathaniel Williams Jr.), which caught the attention of Chocolate City executive Ice Prince  whom she dated for 2 years.
Revised:  2010–2012: Stepping on to the music scene In 2010, Kimani performed a remix of Ice Prince's hit single "OLEKU" (remixed by Nathaniel Williams Jr.), which caught the attention of Chocolate City executive Ice Prince , whom she dated for 2 years.
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Original:  2010–2012: Stepping on to the music scene In 2010, Kimani performed a remix of Ice Prince's hit single "OLEKU" (remixed by Nathaniel Williams Jr.), which caught the attention of Chocolate City executive Ice Prince  whom she dated for 2 years.
Revised:  2010–2012: Stepping on to the music scene In 2010, Kimani performed a remix of Ice Prince's hit single "OLEKU" (remixed by Nathaniel Williams Jr.), which caught the attention of Chocolate City executive Ice Prince whom she dated for two years.
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Original:  In late 2012, she was the first female artist signed by Nigeria's music label Chocolate City, She released her first single under the label, "Mtoto", the Swahili word for "child", in March 2013.
Revised:  In late 2012, she was the first female artist signed by Nigeria's music label Chocolate City, She released her first single under the label, "Mtoto", in March 2013.
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Original:  2013–15: Mixtapes, Whoa, M'Toto, Show, Prokoto She released several mixtapes: Oya, Heaven, Hate Me, Open Up Your Heart, F.U.M.F, Do What You Want and Fre   2014, she released the single "Show", produced by singer and producer Tekno Miles.
Revised:  Kimani released several mixtapes: Oya, Heaven, Hate Me, Open Up Your Heart, F.U.M.F, Do What You Want and Fre 2014, she released the single "Show", produced by singer and producer Tekno Miles.
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Original:  2013–15: Mixtapes, Whoa, M'Toto, Show, Prokoto She released several mixtapes: Oya, Heaven, Hate Me, Open Up Your Heart, F.U.M.F, Do What You Want and Fre   2014, she released the single "Show", produced by singer and producer Tekno Miles.
Revised:  2013–15: Mixtapes, Whoa, M'Toto, Show, Prokoto She released several mixtapes: Oya, Heaven, Hate Me, Open Up Your Heart, F.U.M.F, Do What You Want and Fre . 2014, she released the single "Show", produced by singer and producer Tekno Miles.
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