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Original: The crisis initially broke out on August 7, when Georgia launched an offensive against Tskhinvali, the capital of South Ossetia region.
Revised: On August 7, when Georgia launched an offensive against Tskhinvali, the capital of South Ossetia region.
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Original: The crisis initially broke out on August 7, when Georgia launched an offensive against Tskhinvali, the capital of South Ossetia region.
Revised: The crisis initially broke out on August 7, when Georgia launched an offensive against Tskhinvali, the capital of the region.
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Original:  The next day Russian forces entered the territory of Georgia and started to bomb targets in the country.
Revised:  The next day Russian forces entered the territory of Georgia and started bombing targets in the country.
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Original: Dmitry Medvedev, the President of Russia, announced the withdrawal of Russian forces from Georgia.
Revised: Dmitry Medvedev, the President of Russia, announced the end of Russian military operation in Georgia.
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Original: Dmitry Medvedev, the President of Russia, announced the end of Russian military operation in Georgia.
Revised: Dmitry Medvedev, the President of Russia, announced the end of Russian military operations in Georgia.
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Original:  The news came hours before the planned visit of the presidents of Ukraine, Poland and Lithuania to Tbilisi and president of France visit to Moscow.
Revised:  The news came hours before the presidents of Ukraine, Poland and Lithuania to Tbilisi and president of France visit to Moscow.
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Original:  The news came hours before the planned visit of the presidents of Ukraine, Poland and Lithuania to Tbilisi and president of France visit to Moscow.
Revised:  The news came hours before the planned visit of the presidents of Ukraine, Poland and Lithuania were scheduled to visit Tbilisi, and the president of France visit to Moscow.
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Original:  A visit of prime ministers of Latvia and Estonia to Tbilisi is also planned for today.
Revised:  A visit of prime ministers of Latvia and Estonia are also planned to visit Tbilisi later today.
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Original:  Just before the announcement there were reports of Russian bombing the Georgian town of Gori.
Revised:  Just before the announcement there were reports of the Russian forces bombing the Georgian town of Gori.
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Original:  The declaration of the Kremlin puts an end to the four day Russian offensive inside of Georgia.
Revised:  The declaration of the Kremlin puts an end to the four-day Russian offensive inside of Georgia.
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Original:  The declaration of the Kremlin puts an end to the four day Russian offensive inside of Georgia.
Revised:  The declaration of the Kremlin puts an end to the four day Russian offensive inside Georgia.
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Original:  The next day Russian forces entered the territory of Georgia and started bombing targets in the country.
Revised:  The next day Russian forces entered Georgia and began to bomb targets in the country.
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Original:  On August 10th, Russian Black Sea Fleet began a naval blockade of Georgian port of Poti and landed several thousand Russian troops in Abkhazia in western Georgia.
Revised:  On August 10 the Russian Black Sea Fleet began a naval blockade of Georgian port of Poti and landed several thousand Russian troops in Abkhazia in western Georgia.
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Original:  On August 10th, Russian Black Sea Fleet began a naval blockade of Georgian port of Poti and landed several thousand Russian troops in Abkhazia in western Georgia.
Revised:  On August 10th, Russian Black Sea Fleet began a naval blockade of the Poti Georgian port and landed several thousand Russian troops in Abkhazia in western Georgia.
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Original:  Ukraine threatened to bar Russian warships dispatched to the Abkhazian coast from returning to their Ukrainian base of Sevastopol if they  engage in any military action
Revised:  Ukraine threatened to bar Russian warships dispatched to the Abkhazian coast from returning to their Ukrainian base of Sevastopol if they were to engage in any military action
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Original:  In a statement made earlier today, Medvedev declared that the reason for Russian withdrawal was the humanitarian crisis in the region.
Revised:  In a statement made earlier today, Medvedev declared that the reason for Russia to cease operations was the humanitarian crisis in the region.
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Original:  The news came  hours before the presidents of Ukraine, Poland and Lithuania were scheduled to visit Tbilisi, and the president of France was to visit Moscow.
Revised:  The news came only hours before the presidents of Ukraine, Poland and Lithuania were scheduled to visit Tbilisi, and the president of France was to visit Moscow.
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Original:  The prime ministers of Latvia and Estonia are also planned to visit Tbilisi later today.
Revised:  Also the prime minister of Latvia is planned to visit Tbilisi later today.
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Original:  He added that: "We're following closely the violations of the [regional] equilibrium by Hezbollah and Syria, and the strengthening beyond the fence."
Revised:  "We're following closely the violations of the [regional] equilibrium by Hezbollah and Syria, and the strengthening beyond the fence."
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Original:  Later, Ehud Barak told Israeli television that the Second Lebanon War "turned out into a major launching pad to upgrade Hezbollah's power ". Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister Ariel Sharon and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities  " .
Revised:  Later, Barak told Israeli television that the Second Lebanon War "turned out into a major launching pad to upgrade Hezbollah's power ". Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister Ariel Sharon and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities " .
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Original:  Later, Ehud Barak told Israeli television that the Second Lebanon War "turned out into a major launching pad to upgrade Hezbollah's power ". Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister Ariel Sharon and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities  " .
Revised:  Later, Ehud Barak told Israeli television that the Second Lebanon War "turned out into a major launching pad to upgrade Hezbollah's power ." Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister Ariel Sharon and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities " .
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Original:  Later, Ehud Barak told Israeli television that the Second Lebanon War "turned out into a major launching pad to upgrade Hezbollah's power ". Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister Ariel Sharon and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities  " .
Revised:  Later, Ehud Barak told Israeli television that the Second Lebanon War "turned out into a major launching pad to upgrade Hezbollah's power ". Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister Ariel Sharon and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities / " .
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Original:  Later, Ehud Barak told Israeli television that the Second Lebanon War "turned out into a major launching pad to upgrade Hezbollah's power ". Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister Ariel Sharon and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities  " .
Revised:  Later, Ehud Barak told Israeli television that the Second Lebanon War "turned out into a major launching pad to upgrade Hezbollah's power ". Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister Ariel Sharon and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities " 
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Original:  Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister Ariel Sharon and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities/"
Revised:  Barak also criticized the former Israeli prime minister and the Israeli government for not acting wisely "by not responding to Hezbollah's growing capabilities/"
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Original: On Wednesday, Russian soldiers and paramilitaries marched into the strategic Georgian city of Gori.
Revised: On Wednesday, Russian soldiers and paramilitaries marched into the Georgian city of Gori.
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Original:  This comes one day after a truce was agreed to by both nations that was supposed to put an end to the six-day war that has killed several and uprooted thousands more .
Revised:  This comes one day after a truce was made by both nations that was supposed to put an end to the six-day war that has killed several and uprooted thousands more .
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Original:  This comes one day after a truce was agreed to by both nations that was supposed to put an end to the six-day war that has killed several and uprooted thousands more .
Revised:  This comes one day after a truce was agreed to by both nations to put an end to the six-day war that has killed several and uprooted thousands more .
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Original:  This comes one day after a truce was agreed to by both nations that was supposed to put an end to the six-day war that has killed several and uprooted thousands more .
Revised:  This comes one day after a truce was agreed to by both nations that was supposed to put an end to the six-day war that has killed several and uprooted thousands .
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Original:  However, an Associated Press reporter witnessed dozens of tanks and military vehicles leaving Gori in a southeast direction.
Revised:  An Associated Press reporter witnessed dozens of tanks and military vehicles leaving Gori in a southeast direction.
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Original:  One Russian soldier  said to a photographer, "Come with us, beauty, we're going to Tbilisi!"
Revised:  One Russian soldier reportedly said to a photographer, "Come with us, beauty, we're going to Tbilisi!"
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Original:   However, later unconfirmed reports seem to suggest that the convoy however halted its advance and moved back towards the disputed South Ossetian region .
Revised:  Later unconfirmed reports seem to suggest that the convoy however halted its advance and moved back towards the disputed South Ossetian region .
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Original:   However, later unconfirmed reports seem to suggest that the convoy however halted its advance and moved back towards the disputed South Ossetian region .
Revised:  However, later unconfirmed reports seem to suggest that the convoy later halted its advance and moved back towards the disputed South Ossetian region .
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Original:   However, later unconfirmed reports seem to suggest that the convoy however halted its advance and moved back towards the disputed South Ossetian region .
Revised:  However, later unconfirmed reports seem to suggest that the convoy however halted its advance and moved back towards the disputed South Ossetian region 
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Original:  Tbilisi is the capital city of Georgia .
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Original:  This comes one day after a truce was made by both nations to put an end to the six-day war that has killed several and uprooted thousands.
Revised:  This comes one day after a truce was made by both nations to put an end to the six-day war that has killed many and uprooted thousands.
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Original:  One Russian soldier reportedly said to a photographer, "Come with us, beauty, we're going to Tbilisi!"
Revised:  One Russian soldier jokingly said to a photographer, "Come with us, beauty, we're going to Tbilisi!"
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Original:  Tbilisi is the capital city of Georgia.
Revised:  Tbilisi is the capital of Georgia.
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Original:  "Not only those who commit atrocities are responsible...but so are those that fail to react.     
Revised:  "Not only those who commit atrocities are responsible...but so are those that fail to react. " 
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Original: "Russia has treacherously broken its word," said Georgia's Security Council chief Alexander Lomaia.
Revised: "Russia has treacherously broken its word," said Georgia's Security Council chief Alexandre Lomaia.
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Original: According to Georgian officials and scattered news reports, Russian soldiers and South Ossetia paramilitaries marched into the Georgian city of Gori.
Revised: According to Georgian officials and scattered news reports, Russian soldiers and South Ossetian paramilitaries have marched into the Georgian city of Gori.
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Original:  An Associated Press  reporter witnessed dozens of tanks and military vehicles leaving Gori in a southeast direction.
Revised:  An Associated Press (AP) reporter witnessed dozens of tanks and military vehicles leaving Gori in a southeast direction.
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Original:  According to AP, a BBC reporter witnessed Russian tanks in the streets of Gori, while South Ossetians were seizing Georgian cars and looting homes.
Revised:  According to the AP, a BBC reporter witnessed Russian tanks in the streets of Gori, while South Ossetians were seizing Georgian cars and looting homes.
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Original:  Sergey Lavrov, Russia's foreign affairs minister responded to the US statement by calling Georgia "a special project of the United States.
Revised:  Sergey Lavrov, Russia's Foreign Affairs Minister, responded to the US statement by calling Georgia "a special project of the United States.
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Original:  A Russian ministry of defence official told Interfax that Russian troops were in Senaki to "prevent attacks by Georgian military units against South Ossetia."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "To begin to repair the damage to its relations with the United States, Europe and other nations and to begin restoring its place in the world, Russia must keep its word and act to end this crisis," US president George W. Bush said.
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Original: According to  Georgian officials and scattered news reports, Russian soldiers and South Ossetian paramilitaries have marched into the Georgian city of Gori.
Revised: According to some idiot Georgian officials and scattered news reports, Russian soldiers and South Ossetian paramilitaries have marched into the Georgian city of Gori.
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Original:  The paper alleges that nine-year-old Lin Miaoke, who performed "Ode to the Motherland" during the ceremony, was only a visual effect.
Revised:  It has been revealed that nine-year-old Lin Miaoke, who performed "Ode to the Motherland" during the ceremony, was only a visual effect.
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Original:  The paper also says that some of the fireworks shown on television were CGI effects.
Revised:  It is also now known that that some of the fireworks shown on television were CGI effects.
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Original:  The paper reports that this would not be the first time audio has been pre-recorded for for later lip-syncing citing the 2006 Winter Olympics in Torino, Italy when tenor Luciano Pavarotti mimed to a recorded version of the song he was singing.
Revised:  This is first time audio has been pre-recorded for for later lip-syncing citing the 2006 Winter Olympics in Torino, Italy when tenor Luciano Pavarotti mimed to a recorded version of the song he was singing.
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Original: Fireworks at the opening ceremony of the Beijing olympics Officials from the olympic games have confirmed that the organizations in charge of the Opening Ceremony for the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing may have faked at least two parts of the four-and-a-half hour long production.
Revised: Fireworks at the opening ceremony of the Beijing olympics Officials representing the Beijing Olympic Games have confirmed that the organizations in charge of the Opening Ceremony for the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing may have faked at least two parts of the four-and-a-half hour long production.
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Original:  Another scene from the opening ceremony “ The reason was for the national interest, ” Chen Qigang, the opening ceremonies general music designer, said Sunday during a radio interview.
Revised:  Another scene from the opening ceremony " The reason was for the national interest, ” Chen Qigang, the opening ceremonies general music designer, said Sunday during a radio interview.
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Original:  Another scene from the opening ceremony “ The reason was for the national interest, ” Chen Qigang, the opening ceremonies general music designer, said Sunday during a radio interview.
Revised:  Another scene from the opening ceremony “ The reason was for the national interest, " Chen Qigang, the opening ceremonies general music designer, said Sunday during a radio interview.
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Original:  “ The child on camera should be flawless in image, internal feeling and expression.
Revised:  " The child on camera should be flawless in image, internal feeling and expression.
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Original:  ” Opera performers at the ceremony Filmmaker Zhang Yimou, the production's director, praised Lin at a press conference with Chinese media.
Revised:  " Opera performers at the ceremony Filmmaker Zhang Yimou, the production's director, praised Lin at a press conference with Chinese media.
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Original:  “ She’s very cute and sings quite well, too, ” he said according to a transcript of the news conference.
Revised:  " She’s very cute and sings quite well, too, ” he said according to a transcript of the news conference.
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Original:  “ She’s very cute and sings quite well, too, ” he said according to a transcript of the news conference.
Revised:  “ She’s very cute and sings quite well, too, " he said according to a transcript of the news conference.
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Original:  “ I was moved every time we did a rehearsal on this, from the bottom of my heart.
Revised:  " I was moved every time we did a rehearsal on this, from the bottom of my heart.
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Original:  ” The initial performer, a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and “ whose voice was really good, ” but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
Revised:  " The initial performer, a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and “ whose voice was really good, ” but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
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Original:  ” The initial performer, a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and “ whose voice was really good, ” but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
Revised:  ” The initial performer, a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and " whose voice was really good, ” but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
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Original:  ” The initial performer, a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and “ whose voice was really good, ” but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
Revised:  ” The initial performer, a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and “ whose voice was really good, " but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
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Original:  “ After the recording, we thought that Lin Miaoke’s voice was not very suitable, ” Mr. Chen said during his radio interview with Beijing Music Radio.
Revised:  " After the recording, we thought that Lin Miaoke’s voice was not very suitable, ” Mr. Chen said during his radio interview with Beijing Music Radio.
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Original:  “ After the recording, we thought that Lin Miaoke’s voice was not very suitable, ” Mr. Chen said during his radio interview with Beijing Music Radio.
Revised:  “ After the recording, we thought that Lin Miaoke’s voice was not very suitable, " Mr. Chen said during his radio interview with Beijing Music Radio.
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Original:  “ Finally, we made the decision that the voice we would use was Yang Peiyi’s. ”
Revised:  " Finally, we made the decision that the voice we would use was Yang Peiyi’s. ”
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Original:  “ Finally, we made the decision that the voice we would use was Yang Peiyi’s. ”
Revised:  “ Finally, we made the decision that the voice we would use was Yang Peiyi’s. "
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Original: Fireworks at the opening ceremony of the Beijing olympics Officials representing the Beijing Olympic Games have confirmed that the organizations in charge of the Opening Ceremony for the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing may have faked at least two parts of the four-and-a-half hour long production .
Revised: Fireworks at the opening ceremony of the Beijing olympics Officials representing the Beijing Olympic Games have confirmed that the organizations in charge of the Opening Ceremony for the 2008 Summer Olympics may have faked at least two parts of the four-and-a-half hour long production .
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Original: Fireworks at the opening ceremony of the Beijing olympics Officials representing the Beijing Olympic Games have confirmed that the organizations in charge of the Opening Ceremony for the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing may have faked at least two parts of the four-and-a-half hour long production .
Revised: Fireworks at the opening ceremony of the Beijing olympics Officials representing the Beijing Olympic Games have confirmed that the organizations in charge of the Opening Ceremony for the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing may have faked at least two parts of the production, which lasted a total of four and a half hours .
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Original:  Another girl was used in rehearsals, but she was deemed to  old.
Revised:  Another girl was used in rehearsals, but she was deemed to be too old.
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Original:  The initial performer , a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and "whose voice was really good," but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
Revised:  The initial performer was a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and "whose voice was really good," but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
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Original:  The initial performer , a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and "whose voice was really good," but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
Revised:  The initial performer , a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and "whose voice was really good," but Zhang decided that she was too old . About ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
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Original:  The initial performer , a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and "whose voice was really good," but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were audition for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
Revised:  The initial performer , a ten-year-old girl who was not named in the report and "whose voice was really good," but Zhang decided that she was too old and about ten girls were auditioned for the role at Central People’s Radio Station in Beijing.
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