wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Who ever can ID this single-decker bus, which was travelling from Brighton to Southsea, collided with her bicycle at approximately 1315 on Saturday.
Revised:  Who ever can ID this single-decker bus, which was travelling from Brighton to Southsea, collided with a bicycle at approximately 1315 on Saturday.
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Original:  If convicted, he faces a two-year imprisonment and a fine                       
Revised:  If convicted, he faces a two-year imprisonment and a fine . 
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Original: A train crash in India at around 0200 local time Monday (2030 UTC on Sunday) has killed at least 40 people , with some reports saying that far more were dead, and injured at least another 100.
Revised: A train crash in India at around 0200 local time Monday (2030 UTC on Sunday) has killed at least 40 people and injured at least another 100.
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Original: The lowest estimate of the death toll is around 40 dead, and Indian media has reported that there are as many as 100 dead , 150 people injured.
Revised: The lowest estimate of the death toll is around 40 dead, and Indian media has reported that there are as many as 100 dead and 150 people injured.
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Original:  Eksisozluk, zaytung.com, bobiler.org, the Young Civilians, Penguen magazine, “Sansüre Sansür” (Censor Censorship) and “Sansüre Karşı Ortak Platform” (Joint Platform against Censorship) were among  participants.
Revised:  Eksisozluk, zaytung.com, bobiler.org, the Young Civilians, Penguen magazine, “Sansüre Sansür” (Censor Censorship) and “Sansüre Karşı Ortak Platform” (Joint Platform against Censorship) were among the participants.
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Original:  More than 7,000 Internet sites including Last.fm, YouTube and some of Google services are currrently banned in Turkey.
Revised:  More than 7,000 Internet sites including Last.fm, YouTube and some of Google services are currently banned in Turkey.
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Original:  The ban happens when a court issues an order to ban a website according to "Law No 5651" or when the Telecommunications Communication Presidency (TCP), a government agency that manages Turkish ISPs, decides to ban a website on its behalf according to "Law No 5397" without needing a court decision.
Revised:  The ban occurs when a court issues an order to ban a website according to "Law No 5651" or when the Telecommunications Communication Presidency (TCP), a government agency that manages Turkish ISPs, decides to ban a website on its behalf according to "Law No 5397" without needing a court decision.
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Original: Protesters gathered at central Istanbul’s Taksim Square and marched down to Istiklal Avenue, chanting slogans against Transport and Communications Minister Binali Yıldırım, Internet censorship, and especially against "Law No 5651" and "Law No 5397" . More than 7 ,000 Internet sites including Last.fm, YouTube and some of Google services are currently banned in Turkey.
Revised: Protesters gathered at central Istanbul’s Taksim Square and marched down to Istiklal Avenue, chanting slogans against Transport and Communications Minister Binali Yıldırım, Internet censorship, and especially against "Law No 5651" . More than 7 ,000 Internet sites including Last.fm, YouTube and some of Google services are currently banned in Turkey.
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Original:  Reporters Without Borders had previously added Turkey to the list of "countries under surveillance" in its report on "Enemies of the Internet", which was issued March 2010.
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Original: Many Internet groups, nongovernmental organizations, and Internet platforms participated in the protest, Hurriyet Daily News reported.
Revised: Many Internet groups, nongovernmental organizations, and Internet platforms participated in the protest, Hürriyet Daily News reported.
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Original:  Reporters Without Borders reported that The Organisation for Security and Cooperation in Europe (OSCE) recently wrote to the Turkish authorities to urge them once again to restore access to banned Internet sites.
Revised:  Reporters Without Borders reported that the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe (OSCE) recently wrote to the Turkish authorities to urge them once again to restore access to banned Internet sites.
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Original:  Reporters Without Borders reported that The Organisation for Security and Cooperation in Europe (OSCE) recently wrote to the Turkish authorities to urge them once again to restore access to banned Internet sites.
Revised:  Reporters Without Borders reported that The Organisation for Security and Co-operation in Europe (OSCE) recently wrote to the Turkish authorities to urge them once again to restore access to banned Internet sites.
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Original:  Three small leaks of what appear to be bubbles and possibly oil were detected during this survey.
Revised:  Four small leaks of what appear to be bubbles and possibly oil were detected during this survey.
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Original:  Three small leaks of what appear to be bubbles and possibly oil were detected during this survey.
Revised:  Three small leaks of what appear to oil bubbles were detected during this survey.
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Original:  The leaks were detected early this morning, just after 4: 00.
Revised:  The leaks were detected early this morning, just after 4: 00 (EDT).
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Original:  Smaller eruptions were seen as the ROV traveled , making the seep locations vary from 50 to 60 feet from the damaged well . After an investigation, Wikinews determined that the seepage was located just over 50 feet from the Deepwater leak point.
Revised:  Smaller eruptions were seen as the ROV traveled . After an investigation, Wikinews determined that the seepage was located just over 50 feet from the Deepwater leak point.
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Original:  BP fears anything lower than the expected PSI could mean a leak in the cap or elsewhere, such as oil or methane seeping up from the seafloor .
Revised:  BP fears anything lower than the expected PSI could mean a leak in the cap or elsewhere, such as oil or methane seeping up from the seafloor 
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Original:  BP confirmed the leaks and told Wikinews during a phone call to their Houston, Texas press office, there is a "small leak" releasing hydrates consisting of gas and oil.
Revised:  BP confirmed the leaks and told Wikinews in a phone call to their Houston, Texas press office, there is a "small leak" releasing hydrates consisting of gas and oil.
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Original:  BP confirmed the leaks and told Wikinews during a phone call to their Houston, Texas press office, there is a "small leak" releasing hydrates consisting of gas and oil.
Revised:  BP confirmed the leaks and told Wikinews during a phone call to their Houston, Texas press office, there is a "small leak" releasing hydrates consisting of gases and oil.
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Original:  It is not yet known what the pipe carries or what they connect to.
Revised:  It is not yet known what the pipe carries or what it connects to.
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Original: Brampton, Ontario The City of Brampton in Ontario, Canada, and Marikina in the Philippines have recently  "twinned".
Revised: Brampton, Ontario The City of Brampton in Ontario, Canada, and Marikina in the Philippines have recently been "twinned".
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Original:   Investigators do not yet have any suspects and do not know the motive, but believe that the shooting may be linked to Mexico's long-running drugs war 
Revised:  Investigators do not yet have any suspects and do not know the motive, but believe that the shooting may be linked to Mexico's long-running drugs war . Police found more than 120 bullet casings at the scene, the majority of which were from .223 caliber guns
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Original:  The victims have not yet been identified, but several of the victims were young and some where women.
Revised:  The victims have not yet been identified, but several were young and some where women.
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Original:  This happened after a similar shooting last month, in which eight people were killed at a bar, in the same city.
Revised:  This happened after a similar shooting last month, in which eight people bit the dust at a bar, in the same city.
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Original:  English footballer Adam Johnson has been arrested on suspicion of having sex with a girl under the age of 16. Johnson, who currently plays for Sunderland AFC , was arrested on Monday morning at his home.
Revised:  English footballer has been arrested on suspicion of having sex with a girl under the age of 16. Johnson, who currently plays for Sunderland AFC , was arrested on Monday morning at his home.
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Original:  English footballer Adam Johnson has been arrested on suspicion of having sex with a girl under the age of 16. Johnson, who currently plays for Sunderland AFC , was arrested on Monday morning at his home.
Revised:  English footballer Adam Johnson has been arrested on suspicion of having sex with a girl under the age of 16. Johnson, who currently plays for , was arrested on Monday morning at his home.
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Original:  Durham Police confirmed that a 27-year-old had been arrested on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16.
Revised:  Police confirmed that a 27-year-old had been arrested on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16.
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Original:  A neighbour of Johnson's spoke to The Sun newspaper about the arrest.
Revised:  A neighbour of Johnson's spoke to newspaper about the arrest.
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Original:  He was due to travel with his club to face Hull on Tuesday night in the English Premier League .
Revised:  He was due to travel with his club to face on Tuesday night in the English Premier League .
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Original:  He was due to travel with his club to face Hull on Tuesday night in the English Premier League .
Revised:  He was due to travel with his club to face Hull on Tuesday night in the .
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Original:  Johnson has made 105 appearances for Sunderland having previously played for Middlesbrough, Leeds and Manchester City .
Revised:  Johnson has made 105 appearances for Sunderland having previously played for , and .
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Original:  He has represented England on 12 occasions and scored two goals for the national team.
Revised:  He has represented on 12 occasions and scored two goals for the national team.
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Original:  Police confirmed that a 27-year-old had been arrested on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16.
Revised:  Police confirmed a 27-year-old had been arrested on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16.
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Original:  The club said "Sunderland AFC has confirmed that Adam Johnson has been suspended from the club, pending the outcome of a police investigation".
Revised:  The club said "Sunderland AFC has confirmed Adam Johnson has been suspended from the club, pending the outcome of a police investigation".
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Original:  Johnson has made 105 appearances for Sunderland having previously played for  , and .
Revised:  Johnson has made 105 appearances for Sunderland having previously played for , , and .
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Original:  The club said "Sunderland AFC has confirmed Adam Johnson has been suspended from the club, pending the outcome of a police investigation ".
Revised:  The club said "Sunderland AFC has confirmed Adam Johnson has been suspended from the club, pending the outcome of a police investigation ."
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Original:  Police confirmed  a 27-year-old had been arrested on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16.
Revised:  Police confirmed they had arrested a 27-year-old had been arrested on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16.
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Original:  Police confirmed  a 27-year-old had been arrested on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16.
Revised:  Police confirmed a 27-year-old male on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16.
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Original:  Police confirmed they had arrested a  27-year-old male  on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16. 
Revised:  Police confirmed they had arrested a " 27-year-old male on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16. 
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Original:  Police confirmed they had arrested a  27-year-old male  on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16. 
Revised:  Police confirmed they had arrested a 27-year-old man on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16. 
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Original:  Police confirmed they had arrested a  27-year-old male  on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16. 
Revised:  Police confirmed they had arrested a 27-year-old male ... on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16. 
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Original:  Police confirmed they had arrested a  27-year-old male  on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16. 
Revised:  Police confirmed they had arrested a 27-year-old male on suspicion of sexual activity with a girl under 16. "
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Original:  The spill occurred on Friday, after a pipeline at the port exploded , and the oil terminal at the port has been closed ever since.
Revised:  The spill occurred on Friday, after a pipeline at the port exploded . The oil terminal at the port has been closed ever since.
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Original:  The spill has been halted, although an oil slick which measured 50 square kilometers at its height remains in the harbor, and ships are using absorbent foam to remove oil from the water, as well as barriers to keep oil from reaching the shore , although parts of the coast reportedly have a slick of oil evident on beaches and rocks.
Revised:  The spill has been halted, although an oil slick which measured 50 square kilometers at its height remains in the harbor, and ships are using absorbent foam to remove oil from the water, as well as barriers to keep oil from reaching the shore . Despite their efforts, parts of the coast reportedly have a slick of oil evident on beaches and rocks.
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Original: Satellite Radio provider Sirius has unveiled a portable version of their radio which lets customers record programming from their satellite radio channels aswell as play MP3 and WMA files.
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Original: Satellite Radio provider Sirius has unveiled a portable version of their radio which lets customers record programming from their satellite radio channels aswell as play MP3 and WMA files .
Revised: Satellite Radio provider Sirius will soon release a portable player which mixes online radio recording with MP3 and WMA files .
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Original: Satellite Radio provider Sirius has unveiled a portable version of their radio which lets customers record programming from their satellite radio channels aswell as play MP3 and WMA files .
Revised: Satellite Radio provider Sirius has unveiled a portable version of their radio which lets customers record programming from their satellite radio channels aswell as play MP3 /WMA playback capabilities .
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Original:  The S50 unit is bundled with the car dock which lets users record from the car dock and transfer the files to the S50. Users can also opt to transfer programming via the home dock, but that device does not come bundled with the S50. Sirius notes that the unit can hold up to 50 hours of satellite programming and MP3/WMA files.
Revised:  The S50 unit is bundled with the car dock being sold by Sirius. Users record radio programming from the car dock and transfer the files to the S50. Users can also opt to transfer programming via the home dock, but that device does not come bundled with the S50. Sirius notes that the unit can hold up to 50 hours of satellite programming and MP3/WMA files.
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Original:  The latter is transfered to the system via PC.
Revised:  The latter is transferred to the system via PC.
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Original:  With the grand final of the cooking competition already scheduled for that time, and expected to attract around four million viewers, the decision has been taken to move the debate forward to 1830 and shorten it to 60 minutes.
Revised:  With the grand finale of the cooking competition already scheduled for that time, and expected to attract around four million viewers, the decision has been taken to move the debate forward to 1830 and shorten it to 60 minutes.
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Original:  With the grand final of the cooking competition already scheduled for that time, and expected to attract around four million viewers, the decision has been taken to move the debate forward to 1830 and shorten it to 60 minutes.
Revised:  With the grand final of the cooking competition already scheduled for that time, and expected to attract around four million viewers, the decision has been made to move the debate forward to 1830 and shorten it to 60 minutes.
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Original:  Australian Green Party leader Bob Brown had also wished to be part of the debate, but joked that he probably had more chance of appearing on MasterChef.
Revised:  Australian Greens leader Bob Brown had also wished to be part of the debate, but joked that he probably had more chance of appearing on MasterChef.
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Original:  it is  300 times the mass of our sun, beyond the previously accepted limit of 150 solar masses.
Revised:  it is approximately 300 times the mass of our sun, beyond the previously accepted limit of 150 solar masses.
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Original: European astronomers have discovered the largest star yet on record;
Revised: European astronomers have discovered the most massive star yet on record;
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Original:  Rod was apparently interested in leading the US Department of Health and Human Services  
Revised:  Rod was apparently interested in leading the US Department of Health and Human Services . 
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Original: Mug shot of Rod Blagojevich Despite promises that he would testify in his own corruption trial, lawyers for former Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich rested their case today.
Revised: Mug shot of Rod Blagojevich Despite promises he would testify in his own corruption trial, lawyers for former Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich rested their case today.
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Original:  His defense did not call a single witness, and apparently feels that the prosecution has not proven their case.
Revised:  His defense did not call a single witness, and apparently feels the prosecution has not proven their case.
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Original: Mug shot of Rod Blagojevich Despite promises he would testify in his own corruption trial, lawyers for former Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich rested their case today.
Revised:  Despite promises he would testify in his own corruption trial, lawyers for former Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich rested their case today.
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Original:  Robert Blagojevich, Rod 's brother and co-defendant in the case, had already testified on his own behalf.
Revised:  Robert Blagojevich, the former governor 's brother and co-defendant in the case, had already testified on his own behalf.
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Original:  Rod 's defense team apparently considered resting their case yesterday, but Zagel gave them an extra day to consider their decision more carefully.
Revised:  Blagojevich 's defense team apparently considered resting their case yesterday, but Zagel gave them an extra day to consider their decision more carefully.
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Original:  Blagojevich is accused of trying to sell the US Senate seat that had been vacated by Barack Obama when he won the 2008 presidential election, among other crimes.
Revised:  Blagojevich is charged with trying to sell the US Senate seat that had been vacated by Barack Obama when he won the 2008 presidential election, among other crimes.
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Original:  Blagojevich is accused of trying to sell the US Senate seat that had been vacated by Barack Obama when he won the 2008 presidential election, among other crimes.
Revised:  Blagojevich is accused of trying to sell the U.S. Senate seat that had been vacated by Barack Obama when he won the 2008 presidential election, among other crimes.
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Original:  Rod was apparently interested in leading the US Department of Health and Human Services.
Revised:  Rod was apparently interested in leading the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services.
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Original:  The California, United States based company has now released an application, entitled Facebook Stories, that allows users of the website to "tell the incredible stories of the moving and interesting ways they've used Facebook" , in recognition of this achievement . Zuckerberg stated that there is a "good chance" of Facebook reaching a total of a billion members in the next three to five years
Revised:  To mark the occasion, the California, United States based company has now released an application, entitled Facebook Stories, that allows users of the website to "tell the incredible stories of the moving and interesting ways they've used Facebook" , in recognition of this achievement . Zuckerberg stated that there is a "good chance" of Facebook reaching a total of a billion members in the next three to five years
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Original:  The California, United States based company has now released an application, entitled Facebook Stories, that allows users of the website to "tell the incredible stories of the moving and interesting ways they've used Facebook" , in recognition of this achievement . Zuckerberg stated that there is a "good chance" of Facebook reaching a total of a billion members in the next three to five years
Revised:  The California, United States-based company released an application, entitled Facebook Stories, that allows users of the website to "tell the incredible stories of the moving and interesting ways they've used Facebook" , in recognition of this achievement . Zuckerberg stated that there is a "good chance" of Facebook reaching a total of a billion members in the next three to five years
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Original:  The California, United States based company has now released an application, entitled Facebook Stories, that allows users of the website to "tell the incredible stories of the moving and interesting ways they've used Facebook" , in recognition of this achievement . Zuckerberg stated that there is a "good chance" of Facebook reaching a total of a billion members in the next three to five years
Revised:  The California, United States based company has now released an application, entitled Facebook Stories, that allows the website's users to "tell the incredible stories of the moving and interesting ways they've used Facebook" , in recognition of this achievement . Zuckerberg stated that there is a "good chance" of Facebook reaching a total of a billion members in the next three to five years
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Original:  The California, United States based company has now released an application, entitled Facebook Stories, that allows users of the website to "tell the incredible stories of the moving and interesting ways they've used Facebook" , in recognition of this achievement . Zuckerberg stated that there is a "good chance" of Facebook reaching a total of a billion members in the next three to five years
Revised:  The California, United States based company has now released an application, entitled Facebook Stories, that allows users of the website to "tell the incredible stories of the moving and interesting ways they've used Facebook" . Zuckerberg stated that there is a "good chance" of Facebook reaching a total of a billion members in the next three to five years
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Original:  An advert by fast food restaurant Burger King has been banned from British television over claims that it is misleading.
Revised: A Burger King advert in London, United Kingdom An advert by fast food restaurant Burger King has been banned from British television over claims that it is misleading.
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