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Original:  Meanwhile, the Davis Faculty Association, a representative of academic staff, has condemned the actions taken by the University of California, calling the actions of the police officers "unprovoked, disproportional and excessive".
Revised:  Meanwhile, the Davis Faculty Association, representing academic staff, has condemned the actions taken by the University of California, calling the actions of the police officers "unprovoked, disproportional and excessive".
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Original:  Meanwhile, the Davis Faculty Association, a representative of academic staff, has condemned the actions taken by the University of California, calling the actions of the police officers "unprovoked, disproportional and excessive".
Revised:  Meanwhile, the Davis Faculty Association, a representative of academic staff, condemned the actions taken by the University of California, calling the actions of the police officers "unprovoked, disproportional and excessive".
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Original:  The association statement also requested by the chancellor of the university resign for what they called a "gross failure of leadership".
Revised:  The association statement requested the chancellor of the university resign for what they called a "gross failure of leadership".
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Original:  Charles J. Kelly, who used to work as a lieutenant for , has defended the actions of the police officers displayed in the video, considering it to be "fairly standard police procedure".
Revised:  Charles J. Kelly, who used to work as a lieutenant for , defended the actions of the police officers displayed in the video, considering it to be "fairly standard police procedure".
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Original:  Charles J. Kelly, who used to work as a lieutenant for , has defended the actions of the police officers displayed in the video, considering it to be "fairly standard police procedure".
Revised:  Charles J. Kelly, who used to work as a lieutenant for , has defended the actions of the police officers as-seen in the video, considering it to be "fairly standard police procedure".
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Original:  Charles J. Kelly, who used to work as a lieutenant for , has defended the actions of the police officers displayed in the video, considering it to be "fairly standard police procedure".
Revised:  Charles J. Kelly, who used to work as a lieutenant for , has defended the actions of the police officers displayed in the video, calling it to be "fairly standard police procedure".
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Original:  Kelly explained that the use of pepper spray is preferable to the police force in scenarios like this, as opposed to attempting to manually lift up protestors . "When you start picking up human bodies, you risk hurting them," explained Kelly.
Revised:  Kelly explained that the use of pepper spray is preferable to physical force in such situations – as-opposed to attempting to manually lift up protestors . "When you start picking up human bodies, you risk hurting them," explained Kelly.
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Original:  Kelly explained that the use of pepper spray is preferable to the police force in scenarios like this, as opposed to attempting to manually lift up protestors . "When you start picking up human bodies, you risk hurting them," explained Kelly.
Revised:  Kelly explained that the use of pepper spray is preferable to the police force in scenarios like this, as opposed to attempting to lift up protesters . "When you start picking up human bodies, you risk hurting them," explained Kelly.
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Original:  University of California, Davis Police Chief Annette Spicuzza also defended the officers' actions, explaining that "[t]he students had encircled the officers".
Revised:  University of California, Davis Police Chief Annette Spicuzza also defended the officers' actions, claiming "[t]he students had encircled the officers".
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Original:  They "needed to exit" and were "were looking to leave but were unable to get out , " according to Spicuzza
Revised:  They "needed to exit" and were "were looking to leave but were unable to get out " according to Spicuzza
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Original:  They "needed to exit" and were "were looking to leave but were unable to get out , " according to Spicuzza
Revised:  They "needed to exit" and were "were looking to leave but were unable to get out , " 
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Original:  They "needed to exit" and were "were looking to leave but were unable to get out"  
Revised:  They "needed to exit" and were "were looking to leave but were unable to get out" . 
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Original:  They "needed to exit" and were "were looking to leave but were unable to get out" .
Revised:  They "needed to exit" and were "were looking to leave but were unable to get out" 
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Original:  These statements are directly contradicted by video footage which shows officers stepping in and out of the encircled protesters with ease while laughing
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Original:  She also stated: "I have worked personally very hard to make the campus a safe campus for all."
Revised:  She also stated: "I have worked personally very hard safe campus for all."
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Original:  Kelly explained that the use of pepper spray is preferable to physical force in such situations – as-opposed to attempting to lift up protesters.
Revised:  Kelly explained that the use of pepper spray is preferable to physical force in such situations , as opposed to attempting to lift up protesters.
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Original:  They "needed to exit" and were  " were looking to leave but were unable to get out"
Revised:  They "needed to exit" and were attempting to depart " were looking to leave but were unable to get out"
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Original:  They "needed to exit" and were  " were looking to leave but were unable to get out"
Revised:  They "needed to exit" and were " but were unable to get out"
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Original:  They "needed to exit" and were attempting to depart " but were unable to get out"
Revised:  They "needed to exit" and "were looking to leave but were unable to get out"
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Original:  Drought conditions have affected the state for 11 years, but 2006 looks to be the worst yet.
Revised:  Drought conditions have affected the state to varying degrees for the past 11 years, but 2006 looks to be the worst yet.
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Original:  Both are needed to refill the water reservoirs and keep forests healthy  .
Revised:  Both are needed to refill the water reservoirs and keep forests healthy ; if they continue to dry out under the current warm weather, it could cause an earlier fire season than usual .
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Original:  The lack of rain will  increase farmers' demand on the water supply earlier in the year than usual and may cause problems if the summer monsoons also fail to arriv
Revised:  The lack of rain will also increase farmers' demand on the water supply earlier in the year than usual and may cause problems if the summer monsoons also fail to arriv
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Original:  The lack of rain will  increase farmers' demand on the water supply earlier in the year than usual and may cause problems if the summer monsoons also fail to arriv
Revised:  The lack of rain will increase farmers' demand on the water supply earlier in the year than usual and may cause problems if the summer monsoons also fail to arrive
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Original:  Economic progress has been slow and created disparity between peopl 
Revised:  Economic progress has been slow and created disparity between people. 
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Original:  Each day in front of the Assembly from 17 to 18 "
Revised:  Each day in front of the Assembly from 17 to 18 
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Original:  Eric Ripper has cancelled his scheduled leave to continue to act as premier in the interim.
Revised:  Eric Ripper has cancelled his scheduled leave to act as Premier in the interim.
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Original: WA Premier, Dr Geoff Gallop resigned on January 16 2006, he was recently diagnosed with depression Western Australian Premier, Dr Geoff Gallop, has resigned from WA Parliament, to treat depression.
Revised:  Western Australian Premier, Dr Geoff Gallop, has resigned from WA Parliament, to treat depression.
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Original: Western Australian Premier, Dr Geoff Gallop, has resigned from WA Parliament , to treat depression.
Revised: Western Australian Premier, Dr Geoff Gallop, has resigned his post , to treat depression.
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Original:  The 54-year-old become State Premier in 2001 and was re-elected in February last year.
Revised:  The 54-year-old became State Premier in 2001 and was re-elected in February last year.
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Original:  He was sent to Jackson Memorial Hospital where he is being treated for numbness to the nec 
Revised:  He was sent to Jackson Memorial Hospital where he is being treated for numbness to the nec Links UR
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Original:  President announced Friday that  Secretary of State will visit Myanmar in December, an unprecedented move since the military junta took power in Myanmar in 1962.
Revised:  President announced Friday that US Secretary of State will visit Myanmar in December, an unprecedented move since the military junta took power in Myanmar in 1962.
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Original:  President announced Friday that  Secretary of State will visit Myanmar in December, an unprecedented move since the military junta took power in Myanmar in 1962.
Revised:  President announced Friday that Secretary of State will visit Myanmar in December, an unprecedented move since the military coup in Myanmar in 1962.
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Original: Map highlighting Iran United States news network CNNwas banned Monday  from working in Iran after a simultaneous translation of a speech by President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad mistakenly included the quote " the use of nuclear weapons is  Iran's right . "  According to the IRNA, Iran's official news agency,what the President actually said was "  Iran has the right to nuclear energy."
Revised: Map highlighting Iran United States news network CNNwas banned Monday from working in Iran " the use of nuclear weapons is Iran's right . " According to the IRNA, Iran's official news agency,what the President actually said was " Iran has the right to nuclear energy."
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Original:   Iran' s   Culture and Islamic Guideline Ministry suspended CNNjournalists from working in Iranand said the error was a " violation of professional ethics. 
Revised:  Iran' s Culture and Islamic Guidance, said on state television that he welcomed CNN's apology, but that " violation of professional ethics. 
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Original: JPG| CNN headquarters in Atlanta Georgia]]
Revised: JPG| Microsoft headquarters in Atlanta Georgia]]
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Original: JPG| Microsoft headquarters in Atlanta Georgia]]
Revised: JPG| CNN headquarters in Atlanta Georgia]]
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Original: File :LewsCastle cropped.jpg|File photo of the southern façade of Lews Castle, Stornoway.
Revised: File photo of the southern façade of Lews Castle, Stornoway.
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Original: File :LewsCastle cropped.jpg|File photo of the southern façade of Lews Castle, Stornoway.
Revised: File :LewsCastle cropped.jpg|File photo of the southern façade of 
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Original:  The (HLF) announced today a grant of £ 4.6 million towards the restoration of on the Western Scottish island of . Estimates suggest approximately £14 million ( 21.9m, 16.2m) will be spent to restore and convert the property into a museum with four-star hotel accommodation.
Revised:  The (HLF) announced today a grant of 4.6 million towards the restoration of on the Western Scottish island of . Estimates suggest approximately £14 million ( 21.9m, 16.2m) will be spent to restore and convert the property into a museum with four-star hotel accommodation.
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Original:  A gap of £1.6 million in required funding remains a concern the local (previously, Western Isles Council) is actively seeking help from both  and the Scottish government.
Revised:  A gap of £1.6 million in required funding remains a concern the local (previously, Western Isles Council) is actively seeking help from both Europe and the Scottish government.
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Original: The inauguration was held out doors, as Liberia lacks any proper buildings for the event to have taken place in, including their captiol building which stood nearby.
Revised: The inauguration was held out doors, as Liberia lacks any proper buildings for the event to have taken place in, including their capitol building which stood nearby.
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Original:  She asked for a moment of silence for the thousands who died in Liberia's civil war   
Revised:  She asked for a moment of silence for the thousands who died in Liberia's civil war . 
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Original:  Ford last visited Eisenhower in January , 2005 for a follow-up on his annual December checkup.
Revised:  Ford last visited the hospital in January 2005 for a follow-up on his annual December checkup.
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Original:  Former United States President Gerald Ford has been hospitalized with pneumonia, an offical annouced today.
Revised: Gerald Ford Former United States President Gerald Ford has been hospitalized with pneumonia, an offical annouced today.
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Original:  Probes are underway both to investigate how this article passed peer review, and whether previous research by Sudbø was fraudulen 
Revised:  Probes are underway both to investigate how this article passed peer review, and whether previous research by Sudbø was fraudulent. 
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Original:  Probes are underway both to investigate how this article passed peer review, and whether previous research by Sudbø was fraudulent . Category:Norway Category:Heal
Revised:  Probes are underway both to investigate how this article passed peer review, and whether previous research by Sudbø was fraudulent Category:Norway Category:Heal
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Original:  Probes are underway both to investigate how this article passed peer review, and whether previous research by Sudbø was fraudulent . Category:Norway Category:Heal
Revised:  Probes are underway both to investigate how this article passed peer review, and whether previous research by Sudbø was fraudulent . 
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Original: According to Norwegian and British newspaper sources, Jon Sudbø, a cancer researcher at the Norwegian Radium Hospital, fabricated at least 900 patient records in his research on NSAID drugs published in October of 2005 ( PMID 16226613 ).
Revised: According to Norwegian and British newspaper sources, Jon Sudbø, a cancer researcher at the Norwegian Radium Hospital, fabricated at least 900 patient records in his research on NSAID drugs published in October of 2005 ( ).
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Original: Small town journalist Andrzej Marek in the town of Police in north-western Poland was imprisoned on January 15 , on the start of a three month sentence.
Revised: Andrzej Marek, a journalist in the town of Police in north-western Poland was imprisoned on January 15 , on the start of a three month sentence.
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Original: Small town journalist Andrzej Marek in the town of Police in north-western Poland was imprisoned on January 15 , on the start of a three month sentence.
Revised: Small town journalist Andrzej Marek in the town of Police in north-western Poland began a three-month jail sentence on January 15 , on the start of a three month sentence.
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Original:  Marek is  editor of a regional weekly newspaper, the Wiesci Polickie (news from the town of Police).
Revised:  Marek is the editor of a regional weekly newspaper, the Wiesci Polickie (news from the town of Police).
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Original:  In February 2001  he published an article alleging that a local municipal employee, who privately ran an advertising agency, had a conflict of interests in which he profited from his position to obtain business for his advertising agency.
Revised:  In February 2001 , he published an article alleging that a local municipal employee, who privately ran an advertising agency, had a conflict of interests in which he profited from his position to obtain business for his advertising agency.
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Original:  In February 2001  he published an article alleging that a local municipal employee, who privately ran an advertising agency, had a conflict of interests in which he profited from his position to obtain business for his advertising agency.
Revised:  In February 2001 he published an article alleging that a local municipal employee, who privately ran an advertising agency, had a conflict of interest in which he profited from his position to obtain business for his advertising agency.
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Original:  In February 2001  he published an article alleging that a local municipal employee, who privately ran an advertising agency, had a conflict of interests in which he profited from his position to obtain business for his advertising agency.
Revised:  In February 2001 he published an article alleging that a local municipal employee, who privately ran an advertising agency, had a conflict of interests in which he profited from his position to obtain business for his agency.
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Original:  In November 2002 he was found guilty of defamation and on appeal in November 2003, had a three-month prison sentence , suspended on the condition that he apologised to the libellee.
Revised:  In November 2002 he was found guilty of defamation . Upon appeal in November 2003, had a three-month prison sentence , suspended on the condition that he apologised to the libellee.
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Original:  In November 2002 he was found guilty of defamation and on appeal in November 2003, had a three-month prison sentence , suspended on the condition that he apologised to the libellee.
Revised:  In November 2002 he was found guilty of defamation and on appeal in November 2003, he had the three-month prison sentence , suspended on the condition that he apologised to the libellee.
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Original:  In November 2002 he was found guilty of defamation and on appeal in November 2003, had a three-month prison sentence , suspended on the condition that he apologised to the libellee.
Revised:  In November 2002 he was found guilty of defamation and on appeal in November 2003, had a three-month prison sentence suspended on the condition that he apologised to the libellee.
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Original:  In November 2002 he was found guilty of defamation and on appeal in November 2003, had a three-month prison sentence , suspended on the condition that he apologised to the libellee.
Revised:  In November 2002 he was found guilty of defamation and on appeal in November 2003, had a three-month prison sentence , suspended on the condition that he apologise to the libellee.
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Original:  He refused to apologise , he applied for a presidential pardon in March 2004, but this was eventually refused.
Revised:  He refused to apologise and applied for a presidential pardon in March 2004, but this was eventually refused.
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Original:  He refused to apologise , he applied for a presidential pardon in March 2004, but this was eventually refused.
Revised:  He refused to apologise , he applied for a presidential pardon in March 2004. This was eventually refused.
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Original:  On March 23, 2004, a court in Szczecin suspended the application of the sentence by six months due to problems in his wife's pregnancy.
Revised:  On March 23, 2004, a court in Szczecin suspended the application of the sentence by six months due to problems with Marek's wife's pregnancy.
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Original:  Reporters sans frontières claims that Poland is the only European Union country in which prison sentences are imposed for "offences of opinion" and that this is the first such occurrence in the European Union .
Revised:  Reporters sans frontières claims that Poland is the only European Union country in which prison sentences are imposed for "offences of opinion" and that this is the first such occurrence in the EU .
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Original:  On July 18, 2003, Dorota Nieznalska was sentenced to six months of community service for having published an art work showing a penis on a cross , and on January 5, 2005, Jerzy Urban was sentenced to a fine of 20,000 złoty (about 5000 euros) for having insulted Pope John Paul II, who qualified for legal protection against insults due to his role as a visiting head of state , but neither of these were prison sentences.
Revised:  On July 18, 2003, Dorota Nieznalska was sentenced to six months of community service for displaying a work of art that showed a penis on a cross , and on January 5, 2005, Jerzy Urban was sentenced to a fine of 20,000 złoty (about 5000 euros) for having insulted Pope John Paul II, who qualified for legal protection against insults due to his role as a visiting head of state , but neither of these were prison sentences.
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Original:  On July 18, 2003, Dorota Nieznalska was sentenced to six months of community service for having published an art work showing a penis on a cross , and on January 5, 2005, Jerzy Urban was sentenced to a fine of 20,000 złoty (about 5000 euros) for having insulted Pope John Paul II, who qualified for legal protection against insults due to his role as a visiting head of state , but neither of these were prison sentences.
Revised:  On July 18, 2003, Dorota Nieznalska was sentenced to six months of community service for having published an art work showing a penis on a cross . On January 5, 2005, Jerzy Urban was sentenced to a fine of 20,000 złoty (about 5000 euros) for having insulted Pope John Paul II, who qualified for legal protection against insults due to his role as a visiting head of state , but neither of these were prison sentences.
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Original:  On July 18, 2003, Dorota Nieznalska was sentenced to six months of community service for having published an art work showing a penis on a cross , and on January 5, 2005, Jerzy Urban was sentenced to a fine of 20,000 złoty (about 5000 euros) for having insulted Pope John Paul II, who qualified for legal protection against insults due to his role as a visiting head of state , but neither of these were prison sentences.
Revised:  On July 18, 2003, Dorota Nieznalska was sentenced to six months of community service for having published an art work showing a penis on a cross , and on January 5, 2005, Jerzy Urban was fined 20,000 złoty (about 5000 euros) for having insulted Pope John Paul II, who qualified for legal protection against insults due to his role as a visiting head of state , but neither of these were prison sentences.
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Original:  On July 18, 2003, Dorota Nieznalska was sentenced to six months of community service for having published an art work showing a penis on a cross , and on January 5, 2005, Jerzy Urban was sentenced to a fine of 20,000 złoty (about 5000 euros) for having insulted Pope John Paul II, who qualified for legal protection against insults due to his role as a visiting head of state , but neither of these were prison sentences.
Revised:  On July 18, 2003, Dorota Nieznalska was sentenced to six months of community service for having published an art work showing a penis on a cross , and on January 5, 2005, Jerzy Urban was sentenced to a fine of 20,000 złoty (about 5000 euros) for having insulted Pope John Paul II, who qualified for legal protection against insults due to his role as a visiting head of state . Neither of these penalties were prison sentences.
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Original:  Websites in Polish cyberspace are calling for appeals to the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights protesting the prison sentence.
Revised:  Polish websites are calling for appeals to the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights protesting the prison sentence.
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