wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Prof. Tagliamonte from UofT said " parents and teachers don't need to be concerned that this new medium is corrupting young people's grammar ". "I don't think parents have to worry, because they're really showing that they are creative and that they have a mastery of the language.
Revised: Prof. Tagliamonte from UofT said " parents and teachers shouldn't be concerned that this new medium is corrupting young people's grammar ". "I don't think parents have to worry, because they're really showing that they are creative and that they have a mastery of the language.
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Original: Prof. Tagliamonte from UofT said " parents and teachers don't need to be concerned that this new medium is corrupting young people's grammar ". "I don't think parents have to worry, because they're really showing that they are creative and that they have a mastery of the language.
Revised: Prof. Tagliamonte from UofT said " parents and teachers don't need to be concerned that this new medium is corrupting young people's grammar . "I don't think parents have to worry, because they're really showing that they are creative and that they have a mastery of the language.
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Original:  "What these kids are doing is showing us that they have a really good command of the English language, so much so that I was really blown away by how fluidly they operate," said Sali Tagliamonte, a professor of linguistics at the University of Toronto .
Revised:  "What these kids are doing is showing us that they have a really good command of the English language, so much so that I was really blown away by how fluidly they operate," he added .
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Original: Such as "lol" (laughing out loud) , they also combine formal language in their messaging.
Revised: Such as "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging, formal language constructs, that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in their messaging.
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Original:  People who use this are more likely to use the word "said" in an instant message rather than " be like.
Revised:  For instance, the word "said" in an instant message rather than " be like.
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Original:  People who use this are more likely to use the word "said" in an instant message rather than " be like.
Revised:  People who use this are more likely to use the word "said" was used in messaging instead of " be like.
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Original:  People who use this are more likely to use the word "said" in an instant message rather than " be like.
Revised:  People who use this are more likely to use the word "said" in an instant message rather than " was like
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Original: The study found that While informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging,  formal language constructs , that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in their messaging.
Revised: The study found that while informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging, formal language constructs , that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in their messaging.
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Original: The study found that While informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging,  formal language constructs , that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in their messaging.
Revised: The study found that While informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging, more formal language constructs , that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in their messaging.
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Original: The study found that While informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging,  formal language constructs , that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in their messaging.
Revised: The study found that While informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging, formal language constructs that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in their messaging.
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Original: The study found that While informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging,  formal language constructs , that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in their messaging.
Revised: The study found that While informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging, formal language constructs , that are not usually used in spoken language were also used in their messaging.
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Original: The study found that While informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging,  formal language constructs , that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in their messaging.
Revised: The study found that While informal forms such as acronyms like "lol" (laughing out loud) are used in text messaging, formal language constructs , that are not usually used in spoken language by the test subjects, are also used in messaging.
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Original: A study by researchers at the University of Toronto found that teenagers demonstrate a strong command of grammar in their text messaging .
Revised: A study by researchers at the University of Toronto found that teenagers demonstrate a strong command of in their .
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Original:  Prof. Sali Tagliamonte, a professor of linguistics at the University of Toronto, said parents and teachers shouldn't be concerned that this new medium is corrupting young people's grammar.
Revised:  Prof. Sali Tagliamonte, a professor of at the University of Toronto, said parents and teachers shouldn't be concerned that this new medium is corrupting young people's grammar.
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Original:  The criminals will be issued with tresspass notices banning them from the main streets of Rotorua.
Revised:  The criminals will be issued with trespass notices banning them from the main streets of Rotorua.
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Original:  Eleven out of twelve councillers , including the Rotorua mayor, supported the by-law along with support from the police.
Revised:  Eleven out of twelve councillors , including the Rotorua mayor, supported the by-law along with support from the police.
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Original:  The tresspass notice would ban the offenders from the CBD for three months, but would allow them to enter if they had appointments or emergencies.
Revised:  The trespass notice would ban the offenders from the CBD for three months, but would allow them to enter if they had appointments or emergencies.
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Original:  They would have CCTV cameras operated by volounteers to catch offenders breaking the trespass notice.
Revised:  They would have CCTV cameras operated by volunteers to catch offenders breaking the trespass notice.
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Original:  The councillers would review the impact of the legislation in three years time.
Revised:  The councillors would review the impact of the legislation in three years time.
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Original: “ I’m proud of him as a soldier and as a son.
Revised: " I’m proud of him as a soldier and as a son.
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Original:  He did the Army proud, ” 60 year-old Robin Cornish said of his son, the one hundred and fifteenth British soldier to be killed in Iraq since operations began in 2003.
Revised:  He did the Army proud, " 60 year-old Robin Cornish said of his son, the one hundred and fifteenth British soldier to be killed in Iraq since operations began in 2003.
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Original:  His father said he would have risen through the ranks: “ He would have got on.
Revised:  His father said he would have risen through the ranks: " He would have got on.
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Original:  ” Cpl Cornish leaves behind his wife Abbey, his three-year old son Ethan and his one-year old daughter Libby.
Revised:  " Cpl Cornish leaves behind his wife Abbey, his three-year old son Ethan and his one-year old daughter Libby.
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Original:  Lt Col Bowron said Cpl Cornish ’ s true passion was for his family.
Revised:  Lt Col Bowron said Cpl Cornish ' s true passion was for his family.
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Original:  “ They were what lay closest to his heart - the rest was irrelevant.
Revised:  " They were what lay closest to his heart - the rest was irrelevant.
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Original:  ” Des Browne, the Defence Secretary, commented on the loss of life in both Iraq and Afghanistan yesterday.
Revised:  " Des Browne, the Defence Secretary, commented on the loss of life in both Iraq and Afghanistan yesterday.
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Original:  “ Our troops are doing a tough job magnificently well.
Revised:  " Our troops are doing a tough job magnificently well.
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Original: In May, seven members of the same family , from the same district , were killed when becoming infected with Bird Flu through possible human to human transmission.
Revised: In May, seven members of the same family from the same district , were killed when becoming infected with Bird Flu through possible human to human transmission.
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Original: In May, seven members of the same family , from the same district , were killed when becoming infected with Bird Flu through possible human to human transmission.
Revised: In May, seven members of the same family , from the same district died when becoming infected with Bird Flu through possible human to human transmission.
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Original: In May, seven members of the same family , from the same district , were killed when becoming infected with Bird Flu through possible human to human transmission.
Revised: In May, seven members of the same family , from the same district , were killed when becoming infected with Bird Flu , possibly through human-to-human transmission.
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Original: The Indonesian Health Ministry has stated that at least seven people, including three children from Northern Sumatra Province in the district of Karo, are being hospitalized for the suspected H5N1 Bird Flu virus and officials believe that the infected are part of "two clusters" of family members who are sick.
Revised: The Indonesian Health Ministry has stated that at least seven people, including three children from Northern Sumatra Province in the district of Karo, are being hospitalized with suspected H5N1 Bird Flu virus and officials believe that the infected are part of "two clusters" of family members who are sick.
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Original: The Indonesian Health Ministry has stated that at least seven people, including three children from Northern Sumatra Province in the district of Karo, are being hospitalized for the suspected H5N1 Bird Flu virus and officials believe that the infected are part of "two clusters" of family members who are sick.
Revised: The Indonesian Health Ministry has stated that at least seven people, including three children from Northern Sumatra Province in the district of Karo, are being hospitalized for the suspected H5N1 Bird Flu and officials believe that the infected are part of "two clusters" of family members who are sick.
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Original:  At the time Nay chaired the House Administration Committee, which controls those cafeterias.
Revised:  At the time Ney chaired the House Administration Committee, which controls those cafeterias.
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Original:  With an absence of fanfare, the foodstuffs renamed three years ago to "Freedom fries" and "Freedom toast" have reverted to their previous names of "French fries" and "French toast" respectively, for food service of the United States Capitol and White House. category:Culture and entertainmentcategory:Foodcategory :Washington, D.C. category:United Statescategory :North Ameri
Revised:  With an absence of fanfare, the foodstuffs renamed three years ago to "Freedom fries" and "Freedom toast" have reverted to their previous names of "French fries" and "French toast" respectively, for food service of the United States Capitol and White House. category:Culture and entertainment category:Food category :Washington, D.C. category:United Statescategory :North Ameri
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Original:  With an absence of fanfare, the foodstuffs renamed three years ago to "Freedom fries" and "Freedom toast" have reverted to their previous names of "French fries" and "French toast" respectively, for food service of the United States Capitol and White House. category:Culture and entertainmentcategory:Foodcategory :Washington, D.C. category:United Statescategory :North Ameri
Revised:  With an absence of fanfare, the foodstuffs renamed three years ago to "Freedom fries" and "Freedom toast" have reverted to their previous names of "French fries" and "French toast" respectively, for food service of the United States Capitol and White House. category:Culture and entertainmentcategory:Foodcategory :Washington, D.C. category:United States category :North Ameri
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Original:  At the time Ney chaired the House Administration Committee , which controls those cafeterias.
Revised:  At the time Ney chaired the House Committee on House Administration , which controls those cafeterias.
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Original:  " Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:Culture and entertainment category:Food category:Washington, D.C. category:United States category:North Ameri
Revised:  Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:Culture and entertainment category:Food category:Washington, D.C. category:United States category:North Ameri
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Original:  " Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:Culture and entertainment category:Food category:Washington, D.C. category:United States category:North Ameri
Revised:  " %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:Culture and entertainment category:Food category:Washington, D.C. category:United States category:North Ameri
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Original:  " Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:Culture and entertainment category:Food category:Washington, D.C. category:United States category:North Ameri
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Original:  The Wikimedia Foundation, always on the prowl for additional funding sources (if your non-profit's bandwidth appetite was doubling every four months, you would be too!), was approached with an offer of hosting by Google, who have run up US$52 billion capitalization since their IPO in Aug. 2004.
Revised:  The Wikimedia Foundation, always on the prowl for additional funding sources (if your non-profit's bandwidth appetite was doubling every four months, you would be too!), was approached with an offer of hosting by Google, who have run up US$52 billion capitalization since their IPO in August 2004.
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Original: "Google Inc. have made a proposal to host some of the content of the Wikimedia projects."
Revised: "Google Inc. has made a proposal to host some of the content of the Wikimedia projects."
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Original:  The facts of the matter are much simpler, and much less exciting, than the speculation across the online community , however.
Revised:  The facts of the matter are much simpler, and much less exciting, than the speculation , however.
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Original:  The Wikimedia Foundation , always on the prowl for additional funding sources (if your non-profit's bandwidth appetite was doubling every four months, you would be too !), was approached with an offer of hosting by Google, who have run up US$52 billion capitalization since their IPO in August 2004.
Revised:  The Wikimedia Foundation , always on the prowl for additional funding sources (if your non-profit's bandwidth appetite was doubling every four months, you would be too ).
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Original: Wikimedia.Org site, simply says Google has offered to host some content, that the board is discussing it and will meet with Google in IRC in March , and that the offer does not require advertising .
Revised: Wikimedia.Org site, simply says the board is discussing it and will meet with Google in IRC in March , and that the offer does not require advertising .
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Original: Wikimedia.Org site, simply says Google has offered to host some content, that the board is discussing it and will meet with Google in IRC in March , and that the offer does not require advertising .
Revised: Wikimedia.Org site, simply says Google has offered to host some content, that the board is discussing it and will meet with Google in IRC in March .
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Original:  And apparently his views have traction in the online community, judging by the comments on Slashdot after a report on his column appeared there.
Revised:  And apparently his views have traction in the online community, judging by comments on Slashdot after a report on his column appeared there.
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Original:  But  calls from the other direction , equally speculative, point out how Google and Wikipedia seem destined to join.
Revised:  But equally speculative calls from the other direction , equally speculative, point out how Google and Wikipedia seem destined to join.
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Original:  But  calls from the other direction , equally speculative, point out how Google and Wikipedia seem destined to join.
Revised:  But calls from the other direction say Google and Wikipedia seem destined to join.
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Original:  But  calls from the other direction , equally speculative, point out how Google and Wikipedia seem destined to join.
Revised:  But calls from the other direction , equally speculative, point out how Google and Wikipedia are destined to join.
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Original:  Unnamed analysts have been quoted on p2pnet.net (quoting TechWack) linking the two because of Microsoft's re-entry into the search engine market , newly powered up with Encarta content.
Revised:  Unnamed analysts quoted on TechWack (and requoted on p2pnet.net (quoting TechWack) linking the two because of Microsoft's re-entry into the search engine market , newly powered up with Encarta content.
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Original:  Unnamed analysts have been quoted on p2pnet.net (quoting TechWack) linking the two because of Microsoft's re-entry into the search engine market , newly powered up with Encarta content.
Revised:  Unnamed analysts have been quoted on p2pnet.net ) linked the two because of Microsoft's re-entry into the search engine market , newly powered up with Encarta content.
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Original:  Unnamed analysts have been quoted on p2pnet.net (quoting TechWack) linking the two because of Microsoft's re-entry into the search engine market , newly powered up with Encarta content.
Revised:  Unnamed analysts have been quoted on p2pnet.net (quoting TechWack) linking the two because of Microsoft's re-entry , newly powered up with Encarta content.
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Original:  Google and Wikipedia should both be impressed with their status on the internet, that such limited data can raise the passions of the online community , and the business community , to such a pitch (or volume)
Revised:  Google and Wikipedia should both be impressed with their status on the internet, that such limited data can raise the passions of the online community and the business community , to such a pitch (or volume)
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Original:  Google and Wikipedia should both be impressed with their status on the internet, that such limited data can raise the passions of the online community , and the business community , to such a pitch (or volume)
Revised:  Google and Wikipedia should both be impressed with their status on the internet, that such limited data can raise the passions of the online community , and the business community to such a pitch (or volume)
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Original: Such a small sentence , but it has launched a thousand rumours .
Revised: This small sentence has launched a thousand rumours .
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Original:  BusinessWeek and ABC News have both covered it, as have hundreds of blogs, including some of the cream of the blogosphere .
Revised:  BusinessWeek and ABC News as well .
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Original:  It  was, of course, met with howls of varying sorts, depending on where in the online or business communities they emanated from.
Revised:  It The offer was, of course, met with howls of varying sorts, depending on where in the online or business communities they emanated from.
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Original:  John Dvorak seems opposed to any such deal, and apparently his views have traction in the onlinecommunity , judging by comments on Slashdot after a report on his column appeared there.
Revised:  John Dvorak seems opposed to any such deal, and his views have traction in the onlinecommunity , judging by comments on Slashdot after a report on his column appeared there.
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Original:  John Dvorak seems opposed to any such deal, and apparently his views have traction in the onlinecommunity , judging by comments on Slashdot after a report on his column appeared there.
Revised:  John Dvorak seems opposed to any such deal, and apparently his views have traction in online , judging by comments on Slashdot after a report on his column appeared there.
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Original:  John Dvorak seems opposed to any such deal, and apparently his views have traction in the onlinecommunity , judging by comments on Slashdot after a report on his column appeared there.
Revised:  John Dvorak seems opposed to any such deal, and apparently his views have traction in the onlinecommunity , judging by comments on Slashdot after a link to his column appeared there.
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Original:  But equally speculative calls from the other direction say Google and Wikipedia are destined to join.
Revised:  Equally speculative calls from the other direction say Google and Wikipedia are destined to join.
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Original:  Unnamed analysts quoted on TechWack (and requoted on p2pnet.net) linked the two because of Microsoft's re-entry, newly powered up with its Encarta content, into the search engine market.
Revised:  Unnamed analysts quoted on TechWack (and re-quoted on p2pnet.net) linked the two because of Microsoft's re-entry, newly powered up with its Encarta content, into the search engine market.
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Original:  Unnamed analysts quoted on TechWack (and requoted on p2pnet.net) linked the two because of Microsoft's re-entry, newly powered up with its Encarta content, into the search engine market.
Revised:  Unnamed analysts quoted on TechWack (and requoted on p2pnet.net) called it a resonse to Microsoft's re-entry, newly powered up with its Encarta content, into the search engine market.
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Original:  Unnamed analysts quoted on TechWack (and requoted on p2pnet.net) linked the two because of Microsoft's re-entry, newly powered up with its Encarta content, into the search engine market.
Revised:  Unnamed analysts quoted on TechWack (and requoted on p2pnet.net) linked the two because of Microsoft's re-entry, newly powered with its Encarta content, into the search engine market.
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Original:  This simply says the Wiki board is discussing the offer, which does not require advertising, and will meet with Google in IRC in March.
Revised:  The page simply says the Wiki board is discussing the offer, which does not require advertising, and will meet with Google in IRC in March.
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Original:  This simply says the Wiki board is discussing the offer, which does not require advertising, and will meet with Google in IRC in March.
Revised:  This simply says the board is discussing the offer, which does not require advertising, and will meet with Google in IRC in March.
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