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Original:  Coaching career Sconce was the fifth head football coach for the Azusa Pacific Cougars located in Azusa, California and he held that position for six seasons, from 1972 until 1977.
Revised:  Coaching career Sconce was the fifth head football coach for the Azusa Pacific Cougars located in Azusa, California , serving for six seasons, from 1972 until 1977.
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Original:  Coaching career Sconce was the fifth head football coach for the Azusa Pacific Cougars located in Azusa, California and he held that position for six seasons, from 1972 until 1977.
Revised:  Coaching career Sconce was the fifth head football coach for the Azusa Pacific Cougars located in Azusa, California and he held that position for six seasons, from 1972 to 1977.
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Original:  His coaching record at Azusa Pacific was 24 wins, 31 losses, and 0 ties.
Revised:  and compiling a record of 24 wins, 31 losses, and 0 ties.
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Original:  the Sconces were arrested on numerous charges relating to forgery of donor consent forms, removal of organs and body parts from the dead and selling them to organ banks and for scientific research, removal of gold dental fillings, and theft of funds from trust accounts and each sentenced to 3 years and 8 months in prison.
Revised:  the Sconces were arrested on numerous charges relating to forgery of donor consent forms, removal of organs and body parts from the dead and selling them to organ banks and for scientific research, removal of gold dental fillings, and theft of funds from trust accounts . They were each sentenced to 3 years and 8 months in prison.
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Original:  the Sconces were arrested on numerous charges relating to forgery of donor consent forms, removal of organs and body parts from the dead and selling them to organ banks and for scientific research, removal of gold dental fillings, and theft of funds from trust accounts and each sentenced to 3 years and 8 months in prison.
Revised:  the Sconces were arrested on numerous charges relating to forgery of donor consent forms, removal of organs and body parts from the dead and selling them to organ banks and for scientific research, removal of gold dental fillings, and theft of funds from trust accounts and each sentenced to three years and eight months in prison.
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Original: Living people Category: 20th-century American criminals Category:American businesspeople convicted of crimes Category:American sportspeople convicted of crimes Category:Azusa Pacific Cougars football coaches Category:Criminals from California Category:Funeral directors Category:High school football coaches in California Category:High school football coaches in Oregon Category:Junior college football coaches in the United States Category:University of California, Santa Barbara alum
Revised: Living people Category: American businesspeople convicted of crimes Category:American sportspeople convicted of crimes Category:Azusa Pacific Cougars football coaches Category:Criminals from California Category:Funeral directors Category:High school football coaches in California Category:High school football coaches in Oregon Category:Junior college football coaches in the United States Category:University of California, Santa Barbara alum
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Original: Living people Category: 20th-century American criminals Category:American businesspeople convicted of crimes Category:American sportspeople convicted of crimes Category:Azusa Pacific Cougars football coaches Category:Criminals from California Category:Funeral directors Category:High school football coaches in California Category:High school football coaches in Oregon Category:Junior college football coaches in the United States Category:University of California, Santa Barbara alum
Revised: Living people Category: 20th-century American criminals Category:American businesspeople convicted of crimes Category:American sportspeople convicted of crimes Category:Azusa Pacific Cougars football coaches Category:Funeral directors Category:High school football coaches in California Category:High school football coaches in Oregon Category:Junior college football coaches in the United States Category:University of California, Santa Barbara alum
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Original:  This position allows access to the anus. 
Revised:  This position allows access to the anus. ukgtiyiytjkghjkyu
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Original:   Kidney position The kidney position is much like the lateral position except the patient's abdomen is placed over a lift in the operating table that bends the body to allow access to the retroperitoneal space.
Revised:  Lloyd-Davies positionIt is a medical term referring to a common position for surgical procedures involving the pelvis and lower abdomen. The majority of colorectal and pelvic surgery is conducted with the patient in the Lloyd-Davis position. Kidney position The kidney position is much like the lateral position except the patient's abdomen is placed over a lift in the operating table that bends the body to allow access to the retroperitoneal space.
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Original: The division of bengal was done under the presidentship of viceroy Lord Curzon.
Revised: The 
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Original:  The Hindus of West Bengal complained that the division would make them a minority in a province that would incorporate the province of Bihar and Orissa.
Revised:  Hindus of West Bengal complained that the division would make them a minority in a province that would incorporate the province of Bihar and Orissa.
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Original:  Muslims began to demand the creation of independent states for Muslims, where their interests will be protected.
Revised:  Muslims began to demand the creation of independent states for Muslims, where their interests would be protected.
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Original: Banerjee believed  that other targets ought to be included.
Revised: Banerjee believed on that other targets ought to be included.
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Original: The first Partition of Bengal (1905) was a territorial reorganization  of the Bengal Presidency implemented by the authorities of the British Raj.
Revised: The first Partition of Bengal (1905) was a territorial reorganization in on of the Bengal Presidency implemented by the authorities of the British Raj.
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Original: The first Partition of Bengal (1905) was a territorial reorganization in on of the Bengal Presidency implemented by the authorities of the British Raj.
Revised: The first Partition of Bengal (1905) was a territorial reorganization of the Bengal Presidency implemented by the authorities of the British Raj.
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Original:  The port itself lies 4 miles (6 km) southwest of Al Luḩayyah, partially protected by the offshore island of Al-Urmak.
Revised:  The port lies 4 miles (6 km) southwest of Al Luḩayyah, partially protected by the offshore island of Al-Urmak.
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Original: From about 1800 onwards Al Luḩayyah was a part of the Ottoman Empire, and in 1912 suffered damage during a dispute between Turkey and Italy .
Revised: From about 1800 onwards Al Luḩayyah was a part of the Ottoman Empire, and in 1912 suffered damage during the Italo-Turkish War .
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Original:  The interest in the local saint (who is buried in the local mosque) quickly attracted new settlers, and within a century, the unassuming town developed from around the mid-15th century into a bustling town, and a substantial centre of the export trade in coffee.
Revised:  The interest in the local saint (who is buried in the local mosque) quickly attracted new settlers, and within a century, the unassuming town developed from around the mid-15th century into a bustling town, and a substantial center of the export trade in coffee.
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Original: The 2002 Tanzanian census was conducted in August 2002 by the National Bureau of Statistics  of the Government of Tanzania.
Revised: The 2002 Tanzanian census was conducted in August 2002 by the National Bureau of Statistics (NBS) of the Government of Tanzania.
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Original: Return of spontaneous circulation (ROSC) is resumption of sustained perfusing cardiac activity associated with significant respiratory effort after cardiac arrest . Signs of ROSC include breathing, coughing, or movement and a palpable pulse or a measurable blood pressure.
Revised: Return of spontaneous circulation (ROSC) is the resumption of a sustained heart rhythm that perfuses the body after cardiac arrest. It is commonly associated with significant respiratory effort after cardiac arrest . Signs of ROSC include breathing, coughing, or movement and a palpable pulse or a measurable blood pressure.
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Original: Return of spontaneous circulation (ROSC) is resumption of sustained perfusing cardiac activity associated with significant respiratory effort after cardiac arrest . Signs of ROSC include breathing, coughing, or movement and a palpable pulse or a measurable blood pressure.
Revised: Return of spontaneous circulation (ROSC) is resumption of sustained perfusing cardiac activity associated with significant respiratory effort . Signs of ROSC include breathing, coughing, or movement and a palpable pulse or a measurable blood pressure.
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Original:   ROSC isn't always achieved when following standard protocol during cardiac arrest . Return of circulation , while a favorable short-term indicator, is not on its own a predictor of a favorable medium- or long-term outcome.
Revised:  ROSC isn't always achieved when following standard protocol during cardiac arrest . Return of circulation is not a predictor of a favorable medium- or long-term outcome.
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Original:  However, there are factors during cardiac arrest that have shown a greater probability  of achieving ROSC. Cardiopulmonary resuscitation (CPR ) and defibrillation increase chances of achieving ROSC. Lazarus phenomenon or autoresuscitation after failed cardiopulmonary resuscitation is the spontaneous return of circulation after  resuscitation attempts have stopped in someone with cardiac arrest.
Revised:  However, there are factors during cardiac arrest that have shown a greater probability of achieving ROSC. Cardiopulmonary resuscitation (CPR ) and defibrillation increase chances of achieving ROSC. Lazarus phenomenon is the spontaneous return of circulation after resuscitation attempts have stopped in someone with cardiac arrest.
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Original:  However, there are factors during cardiac arrest that have shown a greater probability  of achieving ROSC. Cardiopulmonary resuscitation (CPR ) and defibrillation increase chances of achieving ROSC. Lazarus phenomenon or autoresuscitation after failed cardiopulmonary resuscitation is the spontaneous return of circulation after  resuscitation attempts have stopped in someone with cardiac arrest.
Revised:  However, there are factors during cardiac arrest that have shown a greater probability of achieving ROSC. Cardiopulmonary resuscitation (CPR ) and defibrillation increase chances of achieving ROSC. Lazarus phenomenon or autoresuscitation after failed cardiopulmonary resuscitation is the spontaneous return of circulation after cardiopulmonary resuscitation attempts have stopped in someone with cardiac arrest.
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Original:  Thus passive monitoring is recommended for 10 minutes after resuscitation attempts have stopped .
Revised:  Thus passive monitoring is recommended for 10 minutes .
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Original: Return of spontaneous circulation (ROSC) is the resumption of a sustained heart rhythm that perfuses the body after cardiac arrest.
Revised: Return of spontaneous circulation is the resumption of a sustained heart rhythm that perfuses the body after cardiac arrest.
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Original:  Signs of ROSC include breathing, coughing, or movement and a palpable pulse or a measurable blood pressure.
Revised:  Signs of include breathing, coughing, or movement and a palpable pulse or a measurable blood pressure.
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Original:  Someone is considered to have sustained ROSC when circulation persists and CPR has ceased for at least 20 consecutive minutes.
Revised:  Someone is considered to have sustained ROSC when circulation persists and cardiopulmonary resuscitation has ceased for at least 20 consecutive minutes.
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Original:  ROSC can be achieved through cardiopulmonary resuscitation (CPR) and defibrillation.
Revised:  Return of spontaneous circulation can be achieved through cardiopulmonary resuscitation (CPR) and defibrillation.
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Original:  ROSC can be achieved through cardiopulmonary resuscitation (CPR) and defibrillation.
Revised:  ROSC can be achieved through cardiopulmonary resuscitation and defibrillation.
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Original:  There are multiple factors during CPR and defibrillation that are associated with increased success of achieving ROSC . One of the factors in CPR is chest compression fraction (CCF) , which is a measure of how much time during cardiac arrest are chest compressions performed.
Revised:  There are multiple factors during cardiopulmonary resuscitation and defibrillation that are associated with increased success of achieving ROSC . One of the factors in CPR is chest compression fraction (CCF) , which is a measure of how much time during cardiac arrest are chest compressions performed.
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Original:  There are multiple factors during CPR and defibrillation that are associated with increased success of achieving ROSC . One of the factors in CPR is chest compression fraction (CCF) , which is a measure of how much time during cardiac arrest are chest compressions performed.
Revised:  There are multiple factors during CPR and defibrillation that are associated with success of achieving ROSC . One of the factors in CPR is chest compression fraction (CCF) , which is a measure of how much time during cardiac arrest are chest compressions performed.
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Original:  There are multiple factors during CPR and defibrillation that are associated with increased success of achieving ROSC . One of the factors in CPR is chest compression fraction (CCF) , which is a measure of how much time during cardiac arrest are chest compressions performed.
Revised:  There are multiple factors during CPR and defibrillation that are associated with increased success of achieving ROSC . One of the factors in cardiopulmonary resuscitation is the chest compression fraction (CCF) , which is a measure of how much time during cardiac arrest are chest compressions performed.
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Original:  There are multiple factors during CPR and defibrillation that are associated with increased success of achieving ROSC . One of the factors in CPR is chest compression fraction (CCF) , which is a measure of how much time during cardiac arrest are chest compressions performed.
Revised:  There are multiple factors during CPR and defibrillation that are associated with increased success of achieving ROSC . One of the factors in CPR is chest compression fraction , which is a measure of how much time during cardiac arrest are chest compressions performed.
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Original:  A study measured the effects of CCF on ROSC in out-of-hospital cardiac arrest patients with a non-ventricular fibrillation arrhythmia and it showed an increased trend of achieving ROSC with an increased CCF . Another study highlighted the benefits of minimizing chest compression intervals before and after shocking a patient's rhythm,
Revised:  A study measured the effects of CCF on ROSC in out-of-hospital cardiac arrest patients with a non-ventricular fibrillation arrhythmia and it showed an increased trend of achieving ROSC with an increased chest compression fraction . Another study highlighted the benefits of minimizing chest compression intervals before and after shocking a patient's rhythm,
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Original: When the 1892–1894 war in the Eastern Congo began, Ngongo Lutete and his people fought for the Arabs initially, under the command of Tippu Tip's son Sefu.
Revised: When the Congo Arab war began, Ngongo Lutete and his people fought for the Arabs initially, under the command of Tippu Tip's son Sefu.
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Original:  Other Songye's complained to the whites, presumably convincing them of treachery.
Revised:  Other Songyes complained to the whites, presumably convincing them of treachery.
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Original:  In new album by Varsha Bhave Aathawa Swar, Shamika has sung two songs.
Revised:  On a new album by Varsha Bhave Aathawa Swar, Shamika has sung two songs.
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Original:  Albums Aathava Swar composed by Mrs Varsha Bhave Public Appearances Shaniwarwada Kala Mahotsav,
Revised:  Albums Aathava Swar composed by Varsha Bhave Public Appearances Shaniwarwada Kala Mahotsav,
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Original:  Albums Aathava Swar composed by Mrs Varsha Bhave Public Appearances Shaniwarwada Kala Mahotsav,
Revised:  Albums Aathava Swar composed by Mrs Varsha Bhave Public appearances Shaniwarwada Kala Mahotsav,
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Original:  Pune Shravandhara by Yash Foundation, Ratnagiri Bhide Kul Samelan, Ganpatipule Ratnagiri Mahotsav, Ratnagiri Ratnagiri Pulotsav, Ratnagiri Utkrusht vammay nirmitee rajya purakar sohala, Ratnagiri Nashik Road-DevaLali Vyapari Bank, Deepmahotsav, Nashik Natya Samelan, Ratnagiri Shimagotsava, Goa Kojagar, Maharashtra Chitpavan Sangh, Pune External links URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL URL
Revised:  Pune Shravandhara by Yash Foundation, Ratnagiri Bhide Kul Samelan, Ganpatipule Ratnagiri Mahotsav, Ratnagiri Ratnagiri Pulotsav, Ratnagiri Utkrusht vammay nirmitee rajya purakar sohala, Ratnagiri Nashik Road-DevaLali Vyapari Bank, Deepmahotsav, Nashik Natya Samelan, Ratnagiri Shimagotsava, Goa Kojagar, Maharashtra Chitpavan Sangh, Pune External links Esakal.com Onlinenews1.lokmat.com Rhythmhouse.in Maharashtratimes.indiatimes.com Konkantoday.com Loksatta.in Maharashtratimes.indiatimes.com 72.78.249.125/esakal Loksatta.com Esakal.com Onlinenews1.lokmat.com Maharashtratimes.indiatimes.com Konkantoday.com
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Original:  After her LavaNi Judge Avadhut Gupte got impressed and requested Zee Marathi to conduct one whole episode for Lavani ’ s. Texture of her voice quality is very good.
Revised:  After her LavaNi Judge Avadhut Gupte got impressed and requested Zee Marathi to conduct one whole episode for Lavani ' s. Texture of her voice quality is very good.
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Original:  All of this achievement of Shamika is due to her own as well as her parent ’ s huge efforts as well as hard work.
Revised:  All of this achievement of Shamika is due to her own as well as her parent ' s huge efforts as well as hard work.
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Original:  In at least one occasion they attacked Stone Town together with the Portuguese.Stonetown
Revised:  In at least one occasion they attacked Stone Town allying with the Portuguese.Stonetown
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Original: The Mazrui were an Omani -Arab clan that reigned over some areas of East Africa, especially Kenya, from the 18th to the 20th century.
Revised: The Mazrui were an Omani Arab clan that reigned over some areas of East Africa, especially Kenya, from the 18th to the 20th century.
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Original:  In the 18th century they governed Mombasa and other coastal placesThe Omani Ascendacy and opposed the  Al Bu Sa'id Omani dynasty that ruled over Zanzibar.
Revised:  In the 18th century they governed Mombasa and other coastal placesThe Omani Ascendacy and opposed the Al Bu Sa'id Dynasty that ruled over Zanzibar.
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Original: Typical office suite components Existing office suites contain wide range of various components.
Revised:  Existing office suites contain wide range of various components.
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Original:  Most typically, the base components include: Word processor Spreadsheet Presentation program%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Other components of office suites include: Database software Graphics suite (raster graphics editor, vector graphics editor, image viewer) Desktop publishing software Formula editor Diagramming software Email client Communication software Personal information manager Notetaking software Groupware Project management software Web log analysis software
Revised:  Most typically, the base components include: Word processor Spreadsheet Presentation program%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% office s
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Original:  Most typically , the base components include: Word processor Spreadsheet Presentation program Other components of office suites include: Database software Graphics suite (raster graphics editor, vector graphics editor, image viewer ) Desktop publishing software Formula editor Diagramming software Email client Communication software Personal information manager Notetaking software Groupware Project management software Web log analysis software
Revised:  Most typically , the base components include: Word processor Spreadsheet Presentation program Other components office suites include: Database software Graphics suite (raster graphics editor, vector graphics editor, image viewer ) Desktop publishing software Formula editor Diagramming software Email client Communication software Personal information manager Notetaking software Groupware Project management software Web log analysis software
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Original:  Most typically , the base components include: Word processor Spreadsheet Presentation program Other components of office suites include: Database software Graphics suite (raster graphics editor, vector graphics editor, image viewer ) Desktop publishing software Formula editor Diagramming software Email client Communication software Personal information manager Notetaking software Groupware Project management software Web log analysis software
Revised:  Most typically , the base components include: Word processor Spreadsheet Presentation program Other components of office suites include: Database software Graphics suite raster graphics editorvector graphics editorimage viewer Desktop publishing software Formula editor Diagramming software Email client Communication software Personal information manager Notetaking software Groupware Project management software Web log analysis software
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Original: Productivity software can fall into the following categories: Time Management Software: With time management software, one is able to track time on a desktop without any user intervention.
Revised:  Time Management Software: With time management software, one is able to track time on a desktop without any user intervention.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Project Management Software: With project management software, one is able to delegate, track major projects and have a quick overview of the progress made by each team member.
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Original: Office suite LibreOffice, an example of an office suite, showing Writer, Calc, Impress and Draw An office suite is a collection of bundled productivity software (a software suite) intended to be used by knowledge workers.
Revised: Office suite LibreOffice, an example of an office suite, showing Writer, Calc, Impress and Draw An office suite is a bundle of productivity software (a software suite) intended to be used by knowledge workers.
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Original: Office suite LibreOffice, an example of an office suite, showing Writer, Calc, Impress and Draw An office suite is a collection of bundled productivity software (a software suite) intended to be used by knowledge workers.
Revised: Office suite LibreOffice, an example of an office suite, showing Writer, Calc, Impress and Draw An office suite is a collection of bundled productivity software (a software suite) intended to be used by office workers.
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