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Original:  But a kilo of grain needed only 500-4,000 litres  while a kilo of industrially produced meat took 10,000 litres.
Revised:  But a kilo of grain needed only 500-4,000 litres - while a kilo of industrially produced meat took 10,000 litres.
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Original:  Globally, water usage had increased by six times in the past 100 years and would double again by 2050, driven mainly by irrigation and demands by agriculture, said Rijsberman.
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Original:  Billions of people in Asia and Africa already faced water shortages because of poor water management, he said.
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Original:  " We will not run out of bottled water any time soon, but some countries have already run out of water to produce their own food," he said.
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Original:  " Without improvements in water productivity the consequences of this will be even more widespread water scarcity and rapidly increasing water prices." Rijsberman said water scarcity in Africa was caused by a lack of infrastructure to get the water to the people who needed it.
Revised:  Without improvements in water productivity the consequences of this will be even more widespread water scarcity and rapidly increasing water prices." Rijsberman said water scarcity in Africa was caused by a lack of infrastructure to get the water to the people who needed it.
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Original:  Call for radical re-think on global water management IWMI say there has to be a radical transformation in the management of water resources, experts warned - citing as examples Australia, south-central China, and last year’s devastating drought in India.
Revised:  IWMI say there has to be a radical transformation in the management of water resources, experts warned - citing as examples Australia, south-central China, and last year’s devastating drought in India.
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Original:  Call for radical re-think on global water management IWMI say there has to be a radical transformation in the management of water resources, experts warned - citing as examples Australia, south-central China, and last year’s devastating drought in India.
Revised:  Call for radical re-think on global water management 
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Original:  There is, in fact , enough land, water and human capacity to produce enough food for a growing population over the next 50 years, “so in this sense the world is not ‘running out of water’,” he added.
Revised:  There is, he says , enough land, water and human capacity to produce enough food for a growing population over the next 50 years, “so in this sense the world is not ‘running out of water’,” he added.
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Original:  “ Agriculture is driving water scarcity and water scarcity is driving environmental degradation and destruction, ” he said 
Revised:  " Agriculture is driving water scarcity and water scarcity is driving environmental degradation and destruction, ” he said 
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Original:  “ Agriculture is driving water scarcity and water scarcity is driving environmental degradation and destruction, ” he said 
Revised:  “ Agriculture is driving water scarcity and water scarcity is driving environmental degradation and destruction, " he said. 
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Original:  300px |Experts say the price of water may double or triple over the next two decadesThe report said that a calorie of food took roughly 1 litre of water to produce.
Revised:  200px |Experts say the price of water may double or triple over the next two decadesThe report said that a calorie of food took roughly 1 litre of water to produce.
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Original:  Solutions included helping poor countries to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures in a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
Revised:  Solutions included helping poor countries to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures , a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
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Original:  200px|Experts say the price of water may double or triple over the next two decadesThe report said that a calorie of food took roughly 1 litre of water to produce .
Revised:  200px|Experts say the price of water may double or triple over the next two decades The report said that a calorie of food took roughly 1 litre of water to produce .
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Original:  But a kilo of grain needed only 500-4,000 litres - while a kilo of industrially produced meat took 10,000 litres.
Revised:  But a kilo of grain needing only 500-4,000 litres - while a kilo of industrially produced meat took 10,000 litres.
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Original:  But a kilo of grain needed only 500-4,000 litres - while a kilo of industrially produced meat took 10,000 litres.
Revised:  But a kilo of grain needed only 500-4,000 litres compared to a kilo of industrially produced meat took 10,000 litres.
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Original:  But a kilo of grain needed only 500-4,000 litres - while a kilo of industrially produced meat took 10,000 litres.
Revised:  But a kilo of grain needed only 500-4,000 litres - while a kilo of industrially produced meat taking 10,000 litres.
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Original:  From September of this year, Moyles is to portray the role of Herod in a UK tour of the musical ]  .
Revised:  From September of this year, Moyles is to portray the role of Herod in a UK tour of the musical s] .
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Original: In the United Kingdom, radio DJ has announced his intention to stop presenting  on in September of this year, having presented it since January 2004. , who is at present a late-night presenter at the radio station, has been appointed as his replacement.
Revised: In the United Kingdom, radio has announced his intention to stop presenting on in September of this year, having presented it since January 2004. , who is at present a late-night presenter at the radio station, has been appointed as his replacement.
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Original: In the United Kingdom, radio DJ has announced his intention to stop presenting  on in September of this year, having presented it since January 2004. , who is at present a late-night presenter at the radio station, has been appointed as his replacement.
Revised: In the United Kingdom, radio DJ has announced his intention to stop presenting on in September of this year, having presented it since January 2004. , who is currently a late-night presenter at the radio station, has been appointed as his replacement.
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Original:  The Chris Moyles Show has also achieved two . Moyles hosted an edition of his show in March 2011, lasting for 52 hours, which raised £ 2.4 million for UK charity .
Revised:  The Chris Moyles Show has also achieved two . Moyles hosted an edition of his show in March 2011, lasting for 52 hours, which raised 2.4 million for UK charity .
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Original:  The Chris Moyles Show has also achieved two . Moyles hosted an edition of his show in March 2011, lasting for 52 hours, which raised £ 2.4 million for UK charity .
Revised:  The Chris Moyles Show has also achieved two . Moyles hosted an edition of his show in March 2011, lasting for 52 hours, which raised £ 2.4 million for British charity .
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Original:  In July 2011, Moyles had signed a BBC contract, worth a million  , to allow him to continue presenting his show until January 2014.
Revised:  In July 2011, Moyles had signed a BBC contract, worth a million pounds , to allow him to continue presenting his show until January 2014.
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Original:  Recent figures have suggested breakfast show DJ is more popular than Moyles' programme. statistics for the latest period indicate that Evans' programme received a peak of 9.2 million listeners every week on average while The Chris Moyles Show achieved a figure of 7.1 million at the same time.
Revised:  Recent figures have suggested breakfast show host is more popular than Moyles' programme. statistics for the latest period indicate that Evans' programme received a peak of 9.2 million listeners every week on average while The Chris Moyles Show achieved a figure of 7.1 million at the same time.
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Original:  Cooper describes Grimshaw as a "great broadcaster with a passion for music and a mischievous sense of humour, which has made him a hit with our listeners" and believes he will be an "excellent" replacement for Moyles, "bringing a new generation of listeners with him ".
Revised:  Cooper describes Grimshaw as a "great broadcaster with a passion for music and a mischievous sense of humour, which has made him a hit with our listeners" and believes he will be an "excellent" replacement for Moyles, "bringing a new generation of listeners with him ."
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Original:  From September of this year, Moyles is to portray the role of Herod in a UK tour of the musical .
Revised:  From September of this year, Moyles is to portray the role of in a UK tour of the musical .
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Original:  Moyles said his position was "his dream job" and one he had "wanted since [he] was a child . " "Now, I know some kids want to be a professional footballer or a fireman but not me, I'm a geek and I wanted to be on the radio and I wanted the biggest radio show you could get and eventually I got it , " he said.
Revised:  Moyles said his position was "his dream job" and one he had "wanted since [he] was a child . .. I know some kids want to be a professional footballer or a fireman but not me, I'm a geek and I wanted to be on the radio and I wanted the biggest radio show you could get and eventually I got it , " he said.
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Original:  Moyles said his position was "his dream job" and one he had "wanted since [he] was a child . " "Now, I know some kids want to be a professional footballer or a fireman but not me, I'm a geek and I wanted to be on the radio and I wanted the biggest radio show you could get and eventually I got it , " he said.
Revised:  Moyles said his position was "his dream job" and one he had "wanted since [he] was a child . " "Now, I know some kids want to be a professional footballer or a fireman but not me, I'm a geek and I wanted to be on the radio and I wanted the biggest radio show you could get and eventually I got it . " he said.
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Original:  Moyles said his position was "his dream job" and one he had "wanted since [he] was a child . " "Now, I know some kids want to be a professional footballer or a fireman but not me, I'm a geek and I wanted to be on the radio and I wanted the biggest radio show you could get and eventually I got it , " he said.
Revised:  Moyles said his position was "his dream job" and one he had "wanted since [he] was a child . " "Now, I know some kids want to be a professional footballer or a fireman but not me, I'm a geek and I wanted to be on the radio and I wanted the biggest radio show you could get and eventually I got it , " 
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Original:  Space Exploration Technologies (SpaceX ) based in California, and Rocketplane-Kistler of Oklahoma City, will share up to    $ US500 million in NASA seed money to develop their launch vehicles
Revised:  SpaceX based in California, and Rocketplane-Kistler of Oklahoma City, will share up to $ US500 million in NASA seed money to develop their launch vehicles
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Original:  "Kistler has already spent US$700 million developing this idea.  
Revised:  "Kistler has already spent US$700 million developing this idea. " 
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Original:  The K-1’s hardware is 75\% complete , and is scheduled for first flight in 2008
Revised:  The K-1’s hardware is 75\% complete - and is scheduled for first flight in 2008
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Original: 400 Canterbury and Otago university students participating in the annual 'Undie 500' road-trip  turned into a riot when students started throwing bottles around and lighting fires - including sofas .
Revised: The annual 'Undie 500' road-trip turned into a riot when students started throwing bottles around and lighting fires - including sofas .
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Original: 400 Canterbury and Otago university students participating in the annual 'Undie 500' road-trip  turned into a riot when students started throwing bottles around and lighting fires - including sofas .
Revised: 400 Canterbury and Otago university students participating in the annual 'Undie 500' road-trip turned into a riot when students started throwing bottles around and lighting fires .
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Original:  The riot started in Dunedin on Castle Street North  which is known for its parties.
Revised:  The riot started in Dunedin on Castle Street North , which is known for its parties.
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Original:  The Undie 500 road-trip is where students go from Christchurch to Dunedin and along the way stopping at five pubs.
Revised:  In the Undie 500 road-trip is where students go from Christchurch to Dunedin and along the way stopping at five pubs.
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Original:  The Undie 500 road-trip is where students go from Christchurch to Dunedin and along the way stopping at five pubs.
Revised:  The Undie 500 road-trip , students go from Christchurch to Dunedin and along the way stopping at five pubs.
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Original:  The police then turned up finding students watching the New Zealand Fire Service battling the fires they had lit.
Revised:  The police found students watching the New Zealand Fire Service battling the fires they had lit.
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Original:  The riot police then turned up to move students away with batons but more bottles were thrown and fires were continuing to be lit.
Revised:  Riot police then turned up to move students away with batons but more bottles were thrown and fires were continuing to be lit.
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Original:  The riot police then turned up to move students away with batons but more bottles were thrown and fires were continuing to be lit.
Revised:  The riot police then turned up to move students away with batons but more bottles were thrown and more fires were lit.
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Original:  An unnamed student said "This is just out of control."
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Original:  It is the biggest pub crawl of it's kind in Australasia.
Revised:  It is the biggest pub crawl of its kind in Australasia.
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Original: "People were throwing bottles, everyone was getting arrested, the riot police came, and they were hitting people with their batons," said Canterbury Student Josh Binns .
Revised: "People were throwing bottles, everyone was getting arrested, the riot police came, and they were hitting people with their batons," said Canterbury Student Josh Binns 
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Original:  The legendary Indian shehnai maestro Ustad Bismillah Khan Sahib (March 21, 1916 - August 21, 2006) was the third classical musician to be awarded the Bharat Ratna (in 2001), the highest civilian honour in India.
Revised: Ustad Bismillah Khan The legendary Indian shehnai maestro Ustad Bismillah Khan Sahib (March 21, 1916 - August 21, 2006) was the third classical musician to be awarded the Bharat Ratna (in 2001), the highest civilian honour in India.
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Original:  Ustad Bismillah Khan Sahib were one of the few people to be awarded all the top four civilian awards
Revised:  Ustad Bismillah Khan Sahib was one of the few people to be awarded all the top four civilian awards
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Original: Winifred Lomax, a seventy four year-old retired shop worker who lives on Turves road , said: "They had not been seen for a few weeks and someone looked through their letterbox and there was a nasty smell."
Revised: Winifred Lomax, a seventy four year-old retired shop worker who lives on Turves Road , said: "They had not been seen for a few weeks and someone looked through their letterbox and there was a nasty smell."
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Original:  The woman and three children are thought to be Asian and of the same family  
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Original:  The woman and three children are thought to be Asian and of the same family  
Revised:  The woman and three children are thought to be Asian and of the same family . 
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Original: Officers were summoned to the house on Turves Road last night after neighbours became concerned about the well being of the  inhabitants.
Revised: Officers were summoned to the scene on Turves Road last night after neighbours became concerned about the well being of the inhabitants.
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Original: Officers were summoned to the house on Turves Road last night after neighbours became concerned about the well being of the  inhabitants.
Revised: Officers were summoned to the house on Turves Road last night after neighbours became concerned about the well being of the house's inhabitants.
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Original:  Greater Manchester Police had to break into the house, and they discovered four bodies which had been there for some time.
Revised:  Greater Manchester Police had to break into the house, and when they got in, they discovered four bodies which had been there for some time.
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Original:  Winifred Lomax, a seventy four year-old retired shop worker who lives on Turves Road, said: "They had not been seen for a few weeks and someone looked through their letterbox and there was a nasty smell   ."
Revised:  Winifred Lomax, a seventy four year-old retired shop worker who lives on Turves Road, said: "They had not been seen for a few weeks and someone looked through their letterbox and there was a nasty smell ." ."
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Original:  This afternoon, a passer-by told Wikinews what she saw: "I walked past the scene earlier today, and the terrace house was surrounded with tape.
Revised:  This afternoon, an eyewitness told Wikinews what she saw: "I walked past the scene earlier today, and the terrace house was surrounded with tape.
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Original:   This morning, a spokeswoman for Greater Manchester Police said: “A murder investigation has been launched after four bodies were discovered in Cheadle Hulme.
Revised:  Mr Bottomley said the cause of death is not yet known. He also said that post-mortem examinations are yet to take place. "The bodies may have been lying there for up to four weeks and you can imagine in the hot weather we have been faced with a devastating scene." This morning, a spokeswoman for Greater Manchester Police said: “A murder investigation has been launched after four bodies were discovered in Cheadle Hulme.
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Original:  The woman and three children are thought to be Asian and from the same family.
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Original:  The woman and three children are thought to be Asian and from the same family.
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Original: This morning, a spokeswoman for Greater Manchester Police said: “ A murder investigation has been launched after four bodies were discovered in Cheadle Hulme.
Revised: This morning, a spokeswoman for Greater Manchester Police said: " A murder investigation has been launched after four bodies were discovered in Cheadle Hulme.
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Original:  ” This afternoon, an eyewitness told Wikinews what she saw: "I walked past the scene earlier today, and the terrace house was surrounded with tape.
Revised:  " This afternoon, an eyewitness told Wikinews what she saw: "I walked past the scene earlier today, and the terrace house was surrounded with tape.
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Original:  Several officers in white forensic suits were examining the barricaded area and a huge white tent was erected in front of the house ’ s front door."
Revised:  Several officers in white forensic suits were examining the barricaded area and a huge white tent was erected in front of the house ' s front door."
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Original: In a press conference on Wednesday, Karr confessed to killing the child beauty queen by accident.
Revised: In a press conference on Wednesday, Karr confessed to being with JonBenet when she died, adding that her death was an accident.
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Original: In a press conference on Wednesday, Karr confessed to being with JonBenet when she died, adding that her death was an accident.
Revised: In a press conference on Wednesday, Karr confessed to being with JonBenét when she died, adding that her death was an accident.
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Original:  It's very important for me that everyone knows that I love her very much, that her death was unintentional, that it was an accident." Relate
Revised:  It's very important for me that everyone knows that I love her very much, that her death was unintentional, that it was an accident." Related new
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Original:  While Google has proven reticent to release and publish product information in the past, the lack of any published information for the Writely beta re-open has generated a greater than usual number of web posts and articles addressing the subject  
Revised:  While Google has proven reticent to release and publish product information in the past, the lack of any published information for the Writely beta re-open has generated a greater than usual number of web posts and articles addressing the subject . 
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Original:  While Google has proven reticent to release and publish product information in the past, the lack of any published information for the Writely beta re-open has generated a greater than usual number of web posts and articles addressing the subject . Category:Science and technology Category:United States Category:North Ameri
Revised:  While Google has proven reticent to release and publish product information in the past, the lack of any published information for the Writely beta re-open has generated a greater than usual number of web posts and articles addressing the subject Category:Science and technology Category:United States Category:North Ameri
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Original:  While Google has proven reticent to release and publish product information in the past, the lack of any published information for the Writely beta re-open has generated a greater than usual number of web posts and articles addressing the subject . Category:Science and technology Category:United States Category:North Ameri
Revised:  While Google has proven reticent to release and publish product information in the past, the lack of any published information for the Writely beta re-open has generated a greater than usual number of web posts and articles addressing the subject . 
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Original:  He is a suspect in the murders of hospital security guard, Derrick McFarlandand on Sunday, and a police officer 7:30 AM local time.
Revised:  He is a suspect in the murders of hospital security guard, Derrick McFarland on Sunday, and a police officer 7:30 AM local time.
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Original: Police at Virginia Tech in Blacksburg, VA. A manhunt is underway for William Morva who escaped from a hospital in Blacksburg on Sunday  .
Revised: Police at Virginia Tech in Blacksburg, VA. William Morva who escaped from a hospital in Blacksburg on Sunday .
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Original:  This has been confirmed by a statement by the Blacksburg Police . External links Virginia Tech Statement Blacksburg Press Releas
Revised:  This has been confirmed by a statement by the Blacksburg Police External links Virginia Tech Statement Blacksburg Press Releas
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Original:  This has been confirmed by a statement by the Blacksburg Police . External links Virginia Tech Statement Blacksburg Press Releas
Revised:  This has been confirmed by a statement by the Blacksburg Police . 
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Original: At 3:36 pm EDT August 21, 2006, Montgomery County police reported over the police scanner that William Morva was captured and taken into custody.
Revised: At 3:36 pm EDT August 21, 2006, Montgomery County Police reported over the police scanner that William Morva was captured and taken into custody.
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