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Original:  In particular, crowding is of utmost importance in foveal vision,Foveal vision refers to the situation where the observer fixates a visual object and, depending on the latter, uses  the tiny region of highest acuity (in acuity measurements) or the whole of the fovea  (in reading) for processing the visual input. overriding the importance of visual acuity in pattern recognition and reading where crowding represents the bottleneck in processing.
Revised:  In particular, crowding is of utmost importance in foveal vision,Foveal vision refers to the situation where the observer fixates a visual object and, depending on the latter, uses the tiny region of highest acuity (in acuity measurements) or the whole of the fovea and more (in reading) for processing the visual input. overriding the importance of visual acuity in pattern recognition and reading where crowding represents the bottleneck in processing.
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Original: 500x168px|alt= Deconcentration of attention |Symbolic illustration of the difference between concentration and deconcentration of attention.
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Original: 500x168px|alt= Deconcentration of attention |Symbolic illustration of the difference between concentration and deconcentration of attention.
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Original:  Deconcentration of attention is opposite to concentration and can be interpreted as a process of dismantling of the figures in the field of perception and transformation of the perceptual field into a uniform (in the sense that no individual elements could be construed as a perceptual figure) URL of Attention: addressing the complexity of software engineering" from URL 
Revised:  is opposite to concentration and can be interpreted as a process of dismantling of the figures in the field of perception and transformation of the perceptual field into a uniform (in the sense that no individual elements could be construed as a perceptual figure) URL of Attention: addressing the complexity of software engineering" from URL 
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Original: The term “deconcentration of attention” was introduced by Oleg Bakhtiyarov on the basis of research performed in the 1980s at the Kiev Institute of Psychology, USSR. Deconcentration of attention was originally developed “…
Revised: The term was introduced by Oleg Bakhtiyarov on the basis of research performed in the 1980s at the Kiev Institute of Psychology, USSR. Deconcentration of attention was originally developed “…
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Original:  Current Applications The technique of deconcentration of attention is currently a part of psychonetics, a group of psychotechnologies aimed to provide access to various mind resources for practical applications. URL URL
Revised:  Current applications The technique of deconcentration of attention is currently a part of psychonetics, a group of psychotechnologies aimed to provide access to various mind resources for practical applications. URL URL
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Original: The term was introduced by Oleg Bakhtiyarov on the basis of research performed in the 1980s at the Kiev Institute of Psychology, USSR. Deconcentration of attention was originally developed “ …
Revised: The term was introduced by Oleg Bakhtiyarov on the basis of research performed in the 1980s at the Kiev Institute of Psychology, USSR. Deconcentration of attention was originally developed " …
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Original:  as part of training programs for operators in the complex, uncertain, and extreme conditions ” .
Revised:  as part of training programs for operators in the complex, uncertain, and extreme conditions " .
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Original:  Deconcentration of attention allows finding any requested colored number instantaneously .
Revised:  Deconcentration of attention allows finding any requested colored number very quickly .
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Original: Human sexuality is the capacity to have erotic experiences and URL Human sexuality can also refer to the way one person is sexually attracted to another person of the opposite sex (heterosexuality), the same sex (homosexuality), or having both tendencies (bisexuality).
Revised: Human sexuality is the capacity to have erotic experiences and responses. Human sexuality can also refer to the way one person is sexually attracted to another person of the opposite sex (heterosexuality), the same sex (homosexuality), or having both tendencies (bisexuality).
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Original:  Rajan was arrested in Bali by Indonesian police on 25 October 2015.
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Original:  Criminal career%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Chota Rajan was born in a Marathi family background in the Tilaknagar area of Chembur, Mumbai, Maharashtra.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Chota Rajan was born in a Marathi family background in the Tilaknagar area of Chembur, Mumbai, Maharashtra.
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Original:  CBI director Anil Sinha confirmed the arrest saying, "Bali Police arrested Chhota Rajan yesterday at CBI’s request made through Interpol."
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Original: Infobox criminal | name = Chhota Rajan | image = ChottaRajan.jpg | caption = | birth_name = Rajendra Sadashiv Nikalje | birth_place =  Chembur, Mumbai, India | occupation = | conviction_status = Life imprisonment| spouse = Sujata Nikalje| children = 3 | nationality = Indian | birth_date =                The couple has three daughters;
Revised:  Rajendra Sadashiv Nikalje | birth_place = Chembur, Mumbai, India | occupation = | conviction_status = Life imprisonment| spouse = Sujata Nikalje| children = 3 | nationality = Indian | birth_date = The couple has three daughters;
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Original:  He is serving a life sentence at Tihar Jail in New Delhi.
Revised:  He is serving his life sentence at Tihar Jail in New Delhi.
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Original:  He is serving his life sentence at Tihar Jail in New Delhi.
Revised:  He is serving a life sentence at Tihar Jail in New Delhi.
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Original:  He is serving a life sentence at Tihar Jail in New Delhi.
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Original: In Madagascar for many centuries (and even up to the present day) all forms of money have been used by the Ttraditional healers.
Revised: In Madagascar for many centuries (and even up to the present day) all forms of money have been used by the Traditional healers.
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Original:  There live the Bara, the Nahafaly , the Antandroy, the Sakalava and the Antanosy to name a few of the local tribes.
Revised:  There live the Bara, the Mahafaly , the Antandroy, the Sakalava and the Antanosy to name a few of the local tribes.
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Original:  Fanery, as will be seen from the picture above, have a basic shape not unlike the modern AIDS symbol.
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Original: Fanery is the traditional money used in Madagascar  History The southernmost tip of Madagascar has an ever-changing landscape of savannahs, deserts and spiny forests.
Revised: Fanery is the traditional money used in Madagascar . It exists in silver, copper, nickel and aluminium forms and are found in various sizes. Apart from being used as an instrument, Fanery was also used as jewellery and medication. Prior to 1895 there was no local currency, hence the inhabitants of Madagascar transformed the foreign coins into Fanery. History The southernmost tip of Madagascar has an ever-changing landscape of savannahs, deserts and spiny forests.
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Original:  Two forms of traditional money made from imported coins co-existed prior to French colonial rule :    Monnaie Coupée Prior to 1895 there was no local currency.
Revised:  Two forms of traditional money made from imported coins co-existed prior to French colonial rule . Monnaie Coupée Prior to 1895 there was no local currency.
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Original:  Use of Fanery today As mentioned, original Fanery both in silver and copper have become very scarce today.
Revised:  As mentioned, original Fanery both in silver and copper have become very scarce today.
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Original: Art conservation and restoration Australian archaeology Building restoration Conservation area Cultural heritage Cultural landscape Cultural resources management Europa Nostra Valletta Treaty Heritage interpretation Heritage railways Heritage tourism Historic preservation Listed buildings Monument historique Museology Panjab Digital Library Public history Rescue archaeology Roerich Pact Scheduled Ancient Monument Space archaeology World Heritage Sites Initiative for Heritage Conservancy
Revised: Art conservation and restoration Australian archaeology Building restoration Conservation area Cultural heritage Cultural landscape Cultural resources management Europa Nostra Valletta Treaty Heritage interpretation Heritage railways Heritage tourism Historic preservation Listed buildings Monument historique Museology Panjab Digital Library Public history Rescue archaeology Roerich Pact Scheduled Ancient Monument Space archaeology World Heritage Sites 
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Original: While archaeological sites remain the primary focus for many CRM professional, others research historical records or on ethnohistorical projects.
Revised: While archaeological sites remain the primary focus for many CHM professional, others research historical records or on ethnohistorical projects.
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Original: While archaeological sites remain the primary focus for many CHM professional , others research historical records or on ethnohistorical projects.
Revised: While archaeological sites remain the primary focus for many CHM professionals , others research historical records or on ethnohistorical projects.
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Original:  born 30 July 1983) is a Russian handball player  for RK Vardar 1961 and the Russian national team.
Revised:  born 30 July 1983) is a Russian handball player who plays for RK Vardar 1961 and the Russian national team.
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Original: EHF profile  Dibirov is all-time top scorer for RK Vardar in the EHF Champions League having scored 447 goals as of 2018– 19 season.
Revised: EHF profile Dibirov is all-time top scorer for RK Vardar in the EHF Champions League having scored 447 goals as of 19 season.
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Original:  born 30 July 1983) is a Russian handball player who plays for RK Vardar 1961 and the Russian national team.
Revised:  born 30 July 1983) is a Russian handball player who plays for RK Vardar 1961.
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Original:  The treaty was signed on 24February 1826, nearly two years after the war formally broke out on 5March 1824, by General Sir Archibald Campbell on the British side, and the Governor of Legaing Maha Min Hla Kyaw Htin from the Burmese side  without any due permission and consent of the Ahom Kingdom(Assam) themselves .
Revised:  The treaty was signed on 24February 1826, nearly two years after the war formally broke out on 5March 1824, by General Sir Archibald Campbell on the British side, and the Governor of Legaing Maha Min Hla Kyaw Htin from the Burmese side , without any due permission and consent of the Ahom Kingdom(Assam) themselves .
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Original: According to the treaty, the Burmese agreed to: Cede to the British- Assam without any consent and approval of the Ahom Kingdom in their own region , Manipur, Rakhine (Arakan), and the Taninthayi (Tenasserim) coast south of the Salween River.
Revised: According to the treaty, the Burmese agreed to: Cede to the British- Assam , Manipur, Rakhine (Arakan), and the Taninthayi (Tenasserim) coast south of the Salween River.
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Original:  Cease all interference in Cachar  and the Jaintia Hills district.
Revised:  Cease all interference in Cachar region of Assam and the Jaintia Hills district.
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Original:  Indeed, the British would make two more wars—much easierwars—against the much weaker Burmese in 1852 and 1885, and swallow up the entire country by 1885.
Revised:  Indeed, the British would make two more , much easier, wars against the now much weaker Burmese in 1852 and 1885, and swallow up the entire country by 1885.
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Original:  Indeed, the British would make two more wars—much easierwars—against the much weaker Burmese in 1852 and 1885, and swallow up the entire country by 1885.
Revised:  Indeed, the British would make two more wars—much easierwars—against the much weaker Burmese in 1852 and 1885, eventually annexing the entire country by 1885.
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Original: Territories like Assam, Manipur became a part of British India.
Revised: Territories like Assambecame a part of British India.
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Original: Territories like Assambecame a part of British India.
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Original:  Early life John Williams was born in the small town of Moncton, New Brunswick, Canada on 7 March 1940.
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Original: John Williams is a Canadian Retired Mixed Martial Artist , who became the Oldest active professional mixed martial artist at age 70, when he made his professional fight debut against Larry Brewbaker on 24 July 2010.
Revised: John Williams is a Canadian retired mixed martial artist , who became the Oldest active professional mixed martial artist at age 70, when he made his professional fight debut against Larry Brewbaker on 24 July 2010.
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Original: John Williams is a Canadian Retired Mixed Martial Artist , who became the Oldest active professional mixed martial artist at age 70, when he made his professional fight debut against Larry Brewbaker on 24 July 2010.
Revised: John Williams is a Canadian Retired Mixed Martial Artist , who became the oldest active professional mixed martial artist at age 70, when he made his professional fight debut against Larry Brewbaker on 24 July 2010.
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Original:  Martial Arts /MMA Career Williams became so influential through the sport of mixed martial arts (MMA), that he eventually opened up a Jiu-Jitsu practice in the United States in 1963.
Revised:  Martial arts /MMA Career Williams became so influential through the sport of mixed martial arts (MMA), that he eventually opened up a Jiu-Jitsu practice in the United States in 1963.
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Original:  Martial Arts /MMA Career Williams became so influential through the sport of mixed martial arts (MMA), that he eventually opened up a Jiu-Jitsu practice in the United States in 1963.
Revised:  Martial Arts /MMA career Williams became so influential through the sport of mixed martial arts (MMA), that he eventually opened up a Jiu-Jitsu practice in the United States in 1963.
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Original: History The provision of deathcare has historically and often continues to be a highly decentralised and diverse practice combining multiple actors and stages.
Revised: History The provision of deathcare has historically and often continues to be a highly decentralized and diverse practice combining multiple actors and stages.
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Original:  Localised efforts to reform and offer innovative deathcare practices can be seen in the natural deathcare movements such as human composting to natural buriels.
Revised:  Localized efforts to reform and offer innovative deathcare practices can be seen in the natural deathcare movements such as human composting to natural buriels.
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Original: COVD mission and vision statements The mission of the College of Optometrists in Vision Development is to serve as an advocate for comprehensive vision care emphasizing a developmental and behavioral approach.
Revised: COVD The mission of the College of Optometrists in Vision Development is to serve as an advocate for comprehensive vision care emphasizing a developmental and behavioral approach.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% COVD's vision and goal is to facilitate ongoing development in the areas of behavioral and developmental vision care, advocate for wider adoption of vision therapy protocols, and increase recognition of their integral role in enhancing learning, productivity and overall quality of life.
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Original:  COVD background Established in 1971, COVD provides board certification for eye doctors and vision therapists who are prepared to offer state-of-the-art services in: behavioral and developmental vision care;
Revised:  background Established in 1971, COVD provides board certification for eye doctors and vision therapists who are prepared to offer state-of-the-art services in: behavioral and developmental vision care;
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Original:  Optometry and Vision Development . is an official COVD peer reviewed publication.
Revised:  Optometry and Vision Development is an official COVD peer reviewed publication.
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Original: The College of Optometrists in Vision Development (COVD) is an international, non-profit optometric membership organization that provides education, evaluation and board certification programs in behavioral and developmental vision care, vision therapy and visual rehabilitation.
Revised: The College of Optometrists in Vision Development (COVD) is an international, non-profit optometric membership organization which provides education, evaluation and board certification programs in behavioral and developmental vision care, vision therapy and visual rehabilitation.
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Original:  Optometrists who successfully complete their certification process are Board Certified in Vision Development and Vision Therapy and are designated Fellows of COVD (FCOVD).
Revised:  Optometrists who successfully complete their certification process are Board Certified in Vision Development and Vision Therapy and are designated fellows of COVD (FCOVD).
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Original:  Vision therapists are certified to work with COVD Fellows as Certified Optometric Vision Therapists (COVT).
Revised:  Vision therapists are certified to work with COVD fellows as Certified Optometric Vision Therapists (COVT).
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Original:  Optometry and Vision Development is an official COVD peer reviewed publication.
Revised:  Optometry Vision Development is an official COVD peer reviewed publication.
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Original:  It is published 4 times a year and is an open access international journal that is available both online and in hard copy.
Revised:  It is published four times a year and is an open access international journal that is available both online and in hard copy.
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Original:  External links COVD Official page
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Original: COVD background Established in 1971, COVD provides board certification for eye doctors and vision therapists who are prepared to offer state-of-the-art services in: behavioral and developmental vision care, vision therapy, and visual rehabilitation.
Revised: COVD background Established in 1971, COVD provides board certification for eye doctors and vision therapists who are prepared to offer a variety of services in: behavioral and developmental vision care, vision therapy, and visual rehabilitation.
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Original:  The organization consists of doctors of optometry , vision therapists  and other vision specialists.
Revised:  The organization consists of doctors of optometry , vision therapists , and other vision specialists.
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Original:  He took two wickets and was named as the player of the match becoming amongst the very few players who have won this award on debut after the age of 30.
Revised:  He took two wickets and was named as the player of the match .
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Original:  He is the captain of Haryana in the Ranji Trophy , and often opens their batting in T20s .
Revised:  He is the captain of Haryana in the Ranji Trophy .
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Original: Wietz Tobias Botes (born 26 April 1984  in Worcester) in a South African-born rugby union player, who most recently played for the .
Revised: Wietz Tobias Botes (born 26 April 1984 , in Worcester) in a South African-born rugby union player, who most recently played for the .
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Original: Justice Yashwant Shripad Tambe B.A., LL.B.  become Chief Justice of the Bombay High Court during 5 February 1966 till 31 July 1966.
Revised: Justice Yashwant Shripad Tambe B.A., LL.B. become Chief Justice of the Bombay High Court on 5 February 1966 till 31 July 1966.
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Original: Justice Yashwant Shripad Tambe B.A., LL.B.  become Chief Justice of the Bombay High Court during 5 February 1966 till 31 July 1966.
Revised: Justice Yashwant Shripad Tambe B.A., LL.B. become Chief Justice of the Bombay High Court during 5 February 1966 and served until 31 July 1966.
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Original:  He practised at the Bar at Nagpur during 1930-1934.
Revised:  He practised at the Bar at Nagpur from 1930 through 1934.
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Original:  Category:1904 births Category:  People from Amravati Category:Judges of the Bombay High Court Category:Marathi people Category:Possibly living peop
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Original:  Sir Austin Bradford-Hill demonstrated a causal relationship between  smoking and lung cancer, and summarized the line of reasoning in the epidemiological criteriafor causation.
Revised:  Sir Austin Bradford-Hill demonstrated a causal relationship between tobacco smoking and lung cancer, and summarized the line of reasoning in the epidemiological criteriafor causation.
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Original: Description In medicine, the term refers to the  causes of diseases or pathologies.
Revised: Description In medicine, the term refers to the cause or causes of diseases or pathologies.
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Original: Varro On Agriculture 1, xii Loeb Etiological discovery in medicine has a history in Robert Koch's demonstration that the tubercle bacillus (Mycobacterium tuberculosis complex) causes the disease tuberculosis , Bacillus anthracis causes anthrax, and Vibrio cholerae causes cholera.
Revised: Varro On Agriculture 1, xii Loeb Etiological discovery in medicine has a history in Robert Koch's demonstration that species of the pathogenic bacteria Mycobacterium tuberculosis causes the disease tuberculosis , Bacillus anthracis causes anthrax, and Vibrio cholerae causes cholera.
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Original: Varro On Agriculture 1, xii Loeb Etiological discovery in medicine has a history in Robert Koch's demonstration that the tubercle bacillus (Mycobacterium tuberculosis complex) causes the disease tuberculosis , Bacillus anthracis causes anthrax, and Vibrio cholerae causes cholera.
Revised: Varro On Agriculture 1, xii Loeb Etiological discovery in medicine has a history in Robert Koch's demonstration that the tubercle bacillus (Mycobacterium tuberculosis complex) causes the disease tuberculosis ; Bacillus anthracis causes anthrax, and Vibrio cholerae causes cholera.
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Original:  Dr. Al Evans, a US epidemiologist, synthesized his predecessors' ideas in proposing the Unified Concept of Causation .
Revised:  This idea of causality was later used in a proposal for a Unified concept of causation .
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Original: Mahadev Bhaskar Chaubal C.S.I., B.A., LL.B. , Pleader Acting Chief Justice of the Bombay High Court at British time .
Revised: Mahadev Bhaskar Chaubal C.S.I., B.A., LL.B. was Acting Chief Justice of the Bombay High Court at British time .
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Original: Mahadev Bhaskar Chaubal C.S.I., B.A., LL.B. , Pleader Acting Chief Justice of the Bombay High Court at British time .
Revised: Mahadev Bhaskar Chaubal C.S.I., B.A., LL.B. , Pleader Acting Chief Justice of the Bombay High Court during the British Raj .
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