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Original:  This new discipline was first proposedBiography, Patricia E. Bath, NIH by Dr. Patricia E. Bath in 1978 after observations of epidemics rates of preventable blindness among under-served populations in urban areas in the USA as well as under-served populations in so called 3rd world countries.
Revised:  This new discipline was first proposedBiography, Patricia E. Bath, NIH by Dr. Patricia E. Bath in 1978 after observations of epidemics rates of preventable blindness among under-served populations in urban areas in the USA as well as under-served populations in so called third-world countries.
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Original:  Moreover, government institutional based Public Health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at risk populations because the system wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of Ophthalmology Historically, Public health Departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
Revised:  Moreover, government institutional based public health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at risk populations because the system wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of Ophthalmology Historically, Public health Departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
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Original:  Moreover, government institutional based Public Health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at risk populations because the system wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of Ophthalmology Historically, Public health Departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
Revised:  Moreover, government institutional based Public Health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at risk populations because the system wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of ophthalmology Historically, public health departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
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Original:  The disciplines included in Public Health Services were Maternal and Child Health, Nutrition, Family Planning, and Sanitation and Environment .
Revised:  The disciplines included in public health services were maternal and child health, nutrition, family planning, and sanitation and environment .
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Original:  Hospital and Public Health institutions viewed ophthalmology (i.e. eye care services) as a tertiary health care to be delivered solely by ophthalmologists.
Revised:  Hospital and public health institutions viewed ophthalmology (i.e. eye care services) as a tertiary health care to be delivered solely by ophthalmologists.
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Original:  The basic Public Health services included pediatricians, obstetricians, gynecologists, family practice physicians, environment/sanitation specialists as well as nurses and mid-wives but no ophthalmic assistants.
Revised:  The basic public health services included pediatricians, obstetricians, gynecologists, family practice physicians, environment/sanitation specialists as well as nurses and mid-wives but no ophthalmic assistants.
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Original:  The basic Public Health services included pediatricians, obstetricians, gynecologists, family practice physicians, environment/sanitation specialists as well as nurses and mid-wives but no ophthalmic assistants.
Revised:  The basic Public Health services included pediatricians, obstetricians, gynecologists, family practice physicians, environment/sanitation specialists as well as nurses and midwives but no ophthalmic assistants.
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Original:  In the discipline of Community Ophthalmology , the new cadre of personnel known as eye health care workers, eye health care educators or ophthalmic assistants are trained to provide eye care and blindness prevention services at the village or door-to-door level.
Revised:  In the discipline of community ophthalmology , the new cadre of personnel known as eye health care workers, eye health care educators or ophthalmic assistants are trained to provide eye care and blindness prevention services at the village or door-to-door level.
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Original:  For example, in villages with endemic Trachoma the eye care health workers would educate families about the importance of sanitation and hand washing and also provide access to eye drops.
Revised:  For example, in villages with endemic trachoma the eye care health workers would educate families about the importance of sanitation and hand washing and also provide access to eye drops.
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Original:  Community Ophthalmology teachings include the concept of Primary Eye care which has been advocated as both as a stand alone health service as well as a new integral component of basic health services , or Public Health Services .
Revised:  Community ophthalmology teachings include the concept of Primary Eye care which has been advocated as both as a stand alone health service as well as a new integral component of basic health services , or Public Health Services .
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Original:  Community Ophthalmology teachings include the concept of Primary Eye care which has been advocated as both as a stand alone health service as well as a new integral component of basic health services , or Public Health Services .
Revised:  Community Ophthalmology teachings include the concept of primary eye care which has been advocated as both as a stand alone health service as well as a new integral component of basic health services , or Public Health Services .
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Original:  Community Ophthalmology teachings include the concept of Primary Eye care which has been advocated as both as a stand alone health service as well as a new integral component of basic health services , or Public Health Services .
Revised:  Community Ophthalmology teachings include the concept of Primary Eye care which has been advocated as both as a stand alone health service as well as a new integral component of basic health services or public health services .
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Original: Guide Pour Les Programmes De Prevention De Cecite, WHO, 1979 thumbnail|Basic Health Services This new concept has been shown to be a sight saving blindness prevention strategy.
Revised: Guide Pour Les Programmes De Prevention De Cecite, WHO, 1979 thumbnail|Basic health services This new concept has been shown to be a sight saving blindness prevention strategy.
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Original:  Since inception in 1978 programs of Community Ophthalmology have been developed worldwide.
Revised:  Since inception in 1978 , programs of community ophthalmology have been developed worldwide.
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Original:  The promulgation of programs of Community Ophthalmology can be traced through programs of WHO,Report of the 11th meeting of the WHO Programme Advisory Group on the Prevention of Blindness: WHO PBL /95.51 NGO’s like AiPb,American Institute for the prevention of Blindness (AiPb) www.blindnessprevention.org and through the effort of individuals such as Professor  Quarcoopome in Africa Bath PE, Quarcoopome CO, Kirmani: Community Ophthalmology Plan for Underserved Populations.
Revised:  The promulgation of programs of community ophthalmology can be traced through programs of WHO,Report of the 11th meeting of the WHO Programme Advisory Group on the Prevention of Blindness: WHO PBL /95.51 NGO’s like AiPb,American Institute for the prevention of Blindness (AiPb) www.blindnessprevention.org and through the effort of individuals such as Professor Quarcoopome in Africa Bath PE, Quarcoopome CO, Kirmani: Community Ophthalmology Plan for Underserved Populations.
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Original:  The promulgation of programs of Community Ophthalmology can be traced through programs of WHO,Report of the 11th meeting of the WHO Programme Advisory Group on the Prevention of Blindness: WHO PBL /95.51 NGO’s like AiPb,American Institute for the prevention of Blindness (AiPb) www.blindnessprevention.org and through the effort of individuals such as Professor  Quarcoopome in Africa Bath PE, Quarcoopome CO, Kirmani: Community Ophthalmology Plan for Underserved Populations.
Revised:  The promulgation of programs of Community Ophthalmology can be traced through programs of WHO,Report of the 11th meeting of the WHO Programme Advisory Group on the Prevention of Blindness: WHO PBL /95.51 NGOs like AiPb,American Institute for the prevention of Blindness (AiPb) www.blindnessprevention.org and through the effort of individuals such as Professor Quarcoopome in Africa Bath PE, Quarcoopome CO, Kirmani: Community Ophthalmology Plan for Underserved Populations.
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Original:  In 2017 Dr. Bath ’ s role in the founding of Community Ophthalmology was recognized by MEDSCAPE as one of the "14 Women Physicians who changed the Course of American Medicine. ”
Revised:  In 2017 Dr. Bath ' s role in the founding of Community Ophthalmology was recognized by MEDSCAPE as one of the "14 Women Physicians who changed the Course of American Medicine. ”
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Original:  In 2017 Dr. Bath ’ s role in the founding of Community Ophthalmology was recognized by MEDSCAPE as one of the "14 Women Physicians who changed the Course of American Medicine. ”
Revised:  In 2017 Dr. Bath ’ s role in the founding of community ophthalmology was recognized by MEDSCAPE as one of the "14 Women Physicians who changed the Course of American Medicine. ”
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Original:  In 2017 Dr. Bath ’ s role in the founding of Community Ophthalmology was recognized by MEDSCAPE as one of the "14 Women Physicians who changed the Course of American Medicine. ”
Revised:  In 2017 Dr. Bath ’ s role in the founding of Community Ophthalmology was recognized by Medscape as one of the "14 Women Physicians who changed the Course of American Medicine. ”
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Original:  In 2017 Dr. Bath ’ s role in the founding of Community Ophthalmology was recognized by MEDSCAPE as one of the "14 Women Physicians who changed the Course of American Medicine. ”
Revised:  In 2017 Dr. Bath ’ s role in the founding of Community Ophthalmology was recognized by MEDSCAPE as one of the "14 Women Physicians who changed the Course of American Medicine. "
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Original: The failure of hospital based eye care to provide preventive services for at risk populations was evidenced by the high rates of blindness due to preventable causes.
Revised: The failure of hospital-based eye care to provide preventive services for at risk populations was evidenced by the high rates of blindness due to preventable causes.
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Original: The failure of hospital based eye care to provide preventive services for at risk populations was evidenced by the high rates of blindness due to preventable causes.
Revised: The failure of hospital based eye care to provide preventive services for at-risk populations as evidenced by the high rates of blindness due to preventable causes.
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Original:  Moreover, government institutional based public health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at risk populations because the system wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of ophthalmology Historically, public health departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
Revised:  Moreover, government institutional-based public health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at risk populations because the system wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of ophthalmology Historically, public health departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
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Original:  Moreover, government institutional based public health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at risk populations because the system wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of ophthalmology Historically, public health departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
Revised:  Moreover, government institutional based public health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at-risk populations because the system wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of ophthalmology Historically, public health departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
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Original:  Moreover, government institutional based public health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at risk populations because the system wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of ophthalmology Historically, public health departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
Revised:  Moreover, government institutional based public health facilities were not equipped to prevent or treat the at risk populations because the system-wide infrastructure lacked personnel capable of delivery of services for eye health education and eye health care. thumbnail|Subspecialities of ophthalmology Historically, public health departments had staff of physicians, epidemiologists, biostatisticians, environmentalists and perhaps microbiologists.
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Original:  Hospital and public health institutions viewed ophthalmology (i.e. eye care services) as a tertiary health care to be delivered solely by ophthalmologists.
Revised:  Hospital and public health institutions viewed ophthalmology (i.e. eye care services) as tertiary health care to be delivered solely by ophthalmologists.
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Original:  In the discipline of community ophthalmology, the new cadre of personnel known as eye health care workers, eye health care educators  or ophthalmic assistants are trained to provide eye care and blindness prevention services at the village or door-to-door level.
Revised:  In the discipline of community ophthalmology, the new cadre of personnel known as eye health care workers, eye health care educators , or ophthalmic assistants are trained to provide eye care and blindness prevention services at the village or door-to-door level.
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Original:  For example, in villages with endemic trachoma the eye care health workers would educate families about the importance of sanitation and hand washing and also provide access to eye drops.
Revised:  For example, in villages with endemic trachoma the eye care health workers would educate families about the importance of sanitation and handwashing and also provide access to eye drops.
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Original:  In areas with high rates of blindness due to cataract this cadre of personnel would educate families about the cure for blindness due to cataract with eye surgery.
Revised:  In areas with high rates of blindness due to cataract this cadre of personnel would educate families about the cure for blindness due to cataracts with eye surgery.
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Original:  Community ophthalmology teachings include the concept of primary eye care which has been advocated as both as a stand alone health service as well as a new integral component of basic health services or public health services.
Revised:  Community ophthalmology teachings include the concept of primary eye care which has been advocated as both as a stand-alone health service as well as a new integral component of basic health services or public health services.
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Original: Guide Pour Les Programmes De Prevention De Cecite , WHO, 1979 thumbnail|Basic health services This new concept has been shown to be a sight saving blindness prevention strategy.
Revised: Guide Pour Les Programmes De Prevention De Cecite , WHO, 1979 thumbnail|Basic health services This new concept has been shown to be a sight-saving blindness prevention strategy.
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Original:  Since  inception in 1978, programs of community ophthalmology have been developed worldwide.
Revised:  Since its inception in 1978, programs of community ophthalmology have been developed worldwide.
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Original:  In 2017 Dr. Bath's role in the founding of community ophthalmology was recognized by Medscape as one of the "14 Women Physicians who changed the Course of American Medicine."
Revised:  In 2017 Dr. Bath's role in the founding of community ophthalmology was recognized by Medscape as one of the "14 Women Physicians who Changed the Course of American Medicine."
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Original:  In 2021 the English National Health Service started a programme to allow hospital ophthalmologists to access records, referrals  and diagnostic images from high street optometrists in England.
Revised:  In 2021 the English National Health Service started a program to allow hospital ophthalmologists to access records, referrals and diagnostic images from high street optometrists in England.
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Original:  In 2021 the English National Health Service started a programme to allow hospital ophthalmologists to access records, referrals  and diagnostic images from high street optometrists in England.
Revised:  In 2021 the English National Health Service started a programme to allow hospital ophthalmologists to access records, referrals , and diagnostic images from high street optometrists in England.
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Original: Authority He selected as the authority of Shia minority after the passed away of Mirza Muhammad Taqi Shirazi.
Revised: Authority He selected as the authority of Shia minority after the death of Mirza Muhammad Taqi Shirazi.
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Original:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in different majors of disciplines like jurisprudence, principles and others as follow: A Glosses on Orvat Al Vosqa A Glosses on Zakhirat Al Ibad The book of Taharat The book Of Piligrimage The book of Khoms some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
Revised:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in different majors of disciplines like jurisprudence, principles and others as follow: A Glosses on Orvat Al Vosqa A Glosses on Zakhirat Al Ibad The book of Taharat The book of Piligrimage The book of Khoms some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
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Original:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in different majors of disciplines like jurisprudence, principles and others as follow: A Glosses on Orvat Al Vosqa A Glosses on Zakhirat Al Ibad The book of Taharat The book Of Piligrimage The book of Khoms some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
Revised:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in different majors of disciplines like jurisprudence, principles and others as follow: A Glosses on Orvat Al Vosqa A Glosses on Zakhirat Al Ibad The book of Taharat The book Of Piligrimage The book of Khoms Some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
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Original: Infant He was born in Estahbanat in Fars province in Iran at 1279 lunar Hijrah.
Revised: Early life He was born in Estahbanat in Fars province in Iran at 1279 lunar Hijrah.
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Original:  He was inspired by his father who was in turn himself an outstanding religious authority.
Revised:  He was inspired by his father who was a religious authority.
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Original:  Education Shiraz He went to continue his education in Shiraz.
Revised:  Shiraz He went to continue his education in Shiraz.
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Original:  Also he could used of the courses of Shaykh Jafar Mahallati.
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Original:  Najaf Then he traveled to Najaf for the continuation of his education .
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Original:  Authority He selected as the authority of Shia minority after the death of Mirza Muhammad Taqi Shirazi.
Revised:  Career He was selected as the authority of Shia minority after the death of Mirza Muhammad Taqi Shirazi.
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Original:  He was Also appointed to the authority of Iran, India and Pakistan and other countries near the Persian gulf.
Revised:  He was appointed to the authority of Iran, India and Pakistan and other countries near the Persian gulf.
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Original:  Political activity He had participated in political activities and also being supporter of Fadaian Islam and individual such as Sayyed Mojtaba Navvab Safavi.
Revised:  He participated in political activities and also being supporter of Fadaian Islam and individual such as Sayyed Mojtaba Navvab Safavi.
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Original:  Political activity He had participated in political activities and also being supporter of Fadaian Islam and individual such as Sayyed Mojtaba Navvab Safavi.
Revised:  Political activity He had participated in political activities and supported Fadaian Islam and individual such as Sayyed Mojtaba Navvab Safavi.
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Original:  Political activity He had participated in political activities and also being supporter of Fadaian Islam and individual such as Sayyed Mojtaba Navvab Safavi.
Revised:  Political activity He had participated in political activities and also being supporter of Fadaian Islam and individuals such as Sayyed Mojtaba Navvab Safavi.
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Original:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in different majors of disciplines like jurisprudence , principles and others as follow: A Glosses on Orvat Al Vosqa A Glosses on Zakhirat Al Ibad  The book of Taharat The book of Pilgrimage The book of Khoms Some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
Revised:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in disciplines such as jurisprudence and principles: Glosses on " Orvat Al Vosqa A Glosses on Zakhirat Al Ibad The book of Taharat The book of Pilgrimage The book of Khoms Some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
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Original:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in different majors of disciplines like jurisprudence , principles and others as follow: A Glosses on Orvat Al Vosqa A Glosses on Zakhirat Al Ibad  The book of Taharat The book of Pilgrimage The book of Khoms Some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
Revised:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in different majors of disciplines like jurisprudence , principles and others as follow: A Glosses on Orvat Al Vosqa " Glosses on " Zakhirat Al Ibad The book of Taharat The book of Pilgrimage The book of Khoms Some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
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Original:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in different majors of disciplines like jurisprudence , principles and others as follow: A Glosses on Orvat Al Vosqa A Glosses on Zakhirat Al Ibad  The book of Taharat The book of Pilgrimage The book of Khoms Some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
Revised:  Meanwhile, he wrote many books in different majors of disciplines like jurisprudence , principles and others as follow: A Glosses on Orvat Al Vosqa A Glosses on Zakhirat Al Ibad " The book of Taharat The book of Pilgrimage The book of Khoms Some problems on convictionsA glance at life of Ayatollah Estahbanati, p.40-4
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