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Original:  General James Hill, chief of the U.S. Southern Command, which oversaw military operations at the Cuban terrorist lock-up explained the decision to jail the chaplain due to "  the circumstances at the time."
Revised:  General James Hill, chief of the U.S. Southern Command, which oversaw military operations at Guantanamo, called Yee's incarceration necessary, " the circumstances at the time."
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Original:  General James Hill, chief of the U.S. Southern Command, which oversaw military operations at the Cuban terrorist lock-up explained the decision to jail the chaplain due to "  the circumstances at the time."
Revised:  General James Hill, chief of the U.S. Southern Command, which oversaw military operations at the Cuban terrorist lock-up explained the decision to jail the chaplain due to " given the circumstances at the time."
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Original:  Colonel William Costello, a Southern Command spokesman, said "There's really nothing more that we're going to share on the case.
Revised:  And Col. William Costello, a Southern Command spokesman, said "There's really nothing more that we're going to share on the case.
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Original:  US have denied abuse on the Guantánamo detention camp.
Revised:  US have denied abuse on Guantánamo detention camp.
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Original: James Yee, a Muslim chaplain formerly stationed at the Guantánamo detention camp, is now speaking out about his own experience and the incidents he witnessed at Guantanamo.
Revised: James Yee, a Muslim chaplain formerly stationed at the Guantánamo detention camp, is now speaking out about his experience and the incidents he witnessed at Guantanamo.
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Original:  On May 22, Mr. Yee held a speach at Dartmouth College in front of an audience of 100 people, telling from his experiences about his time at the American naval base in Guantánamo Bay.
Revised:  On May 22, Mr. Yee held a speech at Dartmouth Collegeand told an audience of 100 people, telling from his experiences about his time at the American naval base in Guantánamo Bay.
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Original:  Mr Yee told The Dartmouth , the independent Dartmouth College newspaper , " In accepting torture, it damages the reputation of the U.S." and continued "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
Revised:  Mr Yee claimed inThe Dartmouth the Dartmouth College newspaper , " In accepting torture, it damages the reputation of the U.S." and continued "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
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Original:  Mr Yee told The Dartmouth , the independent Dartmouth College newspaper , " In accepting torture, it damages the reputation of the U.S." and continued "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
Revised:  Mr Yee told The Dartmouth , the independent Dartmouth College newspaper , " accepting torture" and that this " damages the reputation of the U.S." and continued "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
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Original:  Mr Yee told The Dartmouth , the independent Dartmouth College newspaper , " In accepting torture, it damages the reputation of the U.S." and continued "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
Revised:  Mr Yee told The Dartmouth , the independent Dartmouth College newspaper , " In accepting torture, it damages the reputation of the U.S." He continued: "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
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Original:  On May 5 he spoke at the University of California, Davis, The UC Davis Center for the Study of Human Rights in the Americas (CSHRA)  hosted a forum about the treatment of prisoners at Guantánamo Bay.
Revised:  On May 5 he spoke at the University of California, Davis, to the UC Davis Center for the Study of Human Rights in the Americas (CSHRA) hosted a forum about the treatment of prisoners at Guantánamo Bay.
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Original:  On May 5 he spoke at the University of California, Davis, The UC Davis Center for the Study of Human Rights in the Americas (CSHRA)  hosted a forum about the treatment of prisoners at Guantánamo Bay.
Revised:  On May 5 he spoke at the University of California, Davis, The UC Davis Center for the Study of Human Rights in the Americas (CSHRA) , which hosted a forum about the treatment of prisoners at Guantánamo Bay.
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Original:  Yee, who earlier said that journalists and congressmen who visit Guantánamo prison don't get a real,
Revised:  Mr Yee believes journalists and congressmen who visit Guantánamo prison don't get a real,
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Original:  Yee, who earlier said that journalists and congressmen who visit Guantánamo prison don't get a real,
Revised:  Yee, who earlier said that journalists and congressmen who visit Guantánamo prison don't get an
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Original:  unsanitized picture of conditions there , told about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened afterward . Mr Yee told about an incident with a cell door , which was mistakenly left unlocked by some guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
Revised:  unsanitized picture of conditions there told at lenght about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened afterward . Mr Yee told about an incident with a cell door , which was mistakenly left unlocked by some guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
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Original:  unsanitized picture of conditions there , told about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened afterward . Mr Yee told about an incident with a cell door , which was mistakenly left unlocked by some guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
Revised:  unsanitized picture of conditions there , told about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened when he was imprisoned . Mr Yee told about an incident with a cell door , which was mistakenly left unlocked by some guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
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Original:  unsanitized picture of conditions there , told about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened afterward . Mr Yee told about an incident with a cell door , which was mistakenly left unlocked by some guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
Revised:  unsanitized picture of conditions there , told about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened afterward . In one incident a cell door , which was mistakenly left unlocked by some guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
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Original:  unsanitized picture of conditions there , told about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened afterward . Mr Yee told about an incident with a cell door , which was mistakenly left unlocked by some guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
Revised:  unsanitized picture of conditions there , told about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened afterward . Mr Yee told about an incident with a cell door had mistakenly been left unlocked by some guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
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Original:  The guards easily overpowered the prisoner . "But the incident didn't stop there," said Yee.
Revised:  The guards easily overpowered the would be escapee . "But the incident didn't stop there," said Yee.
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Original:  Yee said, "I can go on with things that happened in Guantanamo".
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Original:  About the treatment he received when he was himself imprisoned, Yee said ,  "I was arrested in secret, held incommunicado.
Revised:  About the treatment he received when he was imprisoned , "I was arrested in secret, held incommunicado.
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Original:  Yee continues, "  And down on the way, on this trip to Charleston, the guard pulls out of this bag these goggles -- they're blackened out, opaque -- puts them on my eyes so now I can't see a thing.
Revised:  Yee continues, " And down on the way, on this trip to Charleston, the guard pulls out of this bag these goggles ... so now I can't see a thing.
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Original:  He takes out these heavy industrial type ear muffs , the likes that you might see a construction worker wearing when he's jack hammering in the middle of the street, puts them on my ears, and now I can't hear a thing.
Revised:  He takes out these heavy industrial type ear muffs ... puts them on my ears, and now I can't hear a thing.
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Original:  The point is, I was denied my religious rights as a U.S. citizen in military custody, the very same rights that I was able to uphold for prisoners down in Guantanamo." Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, commander of the Guantánamo detention camp,  made the decision to jail  Yee.
Revised:  The point is, I was denied my religious rights as a U.S. citizen in military custody, the very same rights that I was able to uphold for prisoners down in Guantanamo." Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, commander of the Guantánamo detention camp, is said to have made the decision to jail Yee.
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Original:  The point is, I was denied my religious rights as a U.S. citizen in military custody, the very same rights that I was able to uphold for prisoners down in Guantanamo." Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, commander of the Guantánamo detention camp,  made the decision to jail  Yee.
Revised:  The point is, I was denied my religious rights as a U.S. citizen in military custody, the very same rights that I was able to uphold for prisoners down in Guantanamo." Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, commander of the Guantánamo detention camp, made the decision to jail Mr Yee.
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Original:  Miller was then transferred to Iraq, where he was involved in the prisoner abuse scandal at Abu Ghraib.
Revised:  Miller was then transferred to Iraq, where there was a prisoner abuse scandal at Abu Ghraib.
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Original:   In May 2004, when  Yee's case attracted the attention of the media, Gen. James Hill, chief of the U.S. Southern Command, which oversaw military operations at Guantanamo, called Yee's incarceration necessary, "given the circumstances at the time."
Revised:  In May 2004, when Mr Yee's case attracted the attention of the media, Gen. James Hill, chief of the U.S. Southern Command, which oversaw military operations at Guantanamo, called Yee's incarceration necessary, "given the circumstances at the time."
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Original:  And Col. William Costello, a Southern Command spokesman, also said in May 2004, "There's really nothing more that we're going to share on the case.
Revised:  Col. William Costello, a Southern Command spokesman, also said in May 2004, "There's really nothing more that we're going to share on the case.
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Original:  On June 1:st , 2005 Secretary of Defense Donald H. Rumsfeld, on a newsbrief said, "But little has been said about the great lengths that the military go to at Guantánamo Bay to accommodate the religious practices of detainees in their care.
Revised:  On June 1st , 2005 Secretary of Defense Donald H. Rumsfeld, on a newsbrief said, "But little has been said about the great lengths that the military go to at Guantánamo Bay to accommodate the religious practices of detainees in their care.
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Original:  On June 1:st , 2005 Secretary of Defense Donald H. Rumsfeld, on a newsbrief said, "But little has been said about the great lengths that the military go to at Guantánamo Bay to accommodate the religious practices of detainees in their care.
Revised:  On June 1:st , 2005 Secretary of Defense Donald H. Rumsfeld, said, "But little has been said about the great lengths that the military go to at Guantánamo Bay to accommodate the religious practices of detainees in their care.
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Original:  On May 22, Mr. Yee held a speech at Dartmouth Collegeand told an audience of 100 he was accused of espionage and spying by the US in September 2003 and was kept in isolation for 76 days.
Revised:  On May 22, Mr. Yee held a speech at Dartmouth College and told an audience of 100 he was accused of espionage and spying by the US in September 2003 and was kept in isolation for 76 days.
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Original:  Mr Yee claimed inThe Dartmouth the Dartmouth College newspaper  the United States was "accepting torture" and that this "damages the reputation of the U.S." He continued: "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
Revised:  Mr Yee claimed inThe Dartmouth , a Dartmouth College newspaper the United States was "accepting torture" and that this "damages the reputation of the U.S." He continued: "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
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Original:  Mr Yee claimed inThe Dartmouth the Dartmouth College newspaper  the United States was "accepting torture" and that this "damages the reputation of the U.S." He continued: "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
Revised:  Mr Yee claimed inThe Dartmouth the Dartmouth College newspaper , the United States was "accepting torture" and that this "damages the reputation of the U.S." He continued: "We've lost that status of being the beacon of human rights because of Abu Ghraib and Guantánamo".
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Original:  On May 5 Mr Yee had spoken at the University of California, Davis, to the UC Davis Center for the Study of Human Rights in the Americas (CSHRA) , which hosted a forum about the treatment of prisoners at Guantánamo Bay.
Revised:  On May 5 Mr Yee had spoken at the University of California, Davis, to the UC Davis Center for the Study of Human Rights in the Americas (CSHRA) . They had hosted a forum about the treatment of prisoners at Guantánamo Bay.
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Original:  Mr Yee believes journalists and congressmen who visit Guantánamo prison don't get an unsanitized picture of conditions there told at lenght about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened when he was imprisoned.
Revised:  Mr Yee believes journalists and congressmen who visit Guantánamo prison don't get an unsanitized picture of conditions there told at length about his personal experience, what prisoners and interpreters told him during his time as Guantánamo chaplain, and what happened when he was imprisoned.
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Original:  In one incident a cell door had mistakenly been left unlocked by some guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
Revised:  In one incident a cell door had mistakenly been left unlocked by guards, and a prisoner left his cell and attempted to lock the three guards in the cell while they were conducting a search.
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Original:  The guards easily overpowered the would be escapee.
Revised:  The guards easily overpowered the would-be escapee.
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Original:  "But the incident didn't stop there," said Mr Yee who claimed this incident lead to a violent reaction from the guards.
Revised:  "But the incident didn't stop there," said Mr Yee who said this incident lead to a violent reaction from the guards.
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Original:  Yee also claims some prisoners were children "the ages of some of the prisoners down there, as young as 12 to 14 years old.
Revised:  Yee also said that some prisoners were children "the ages of some of the prisoners down there, as young as 12 to 14 years old.
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Original:  Luxembourg's largest steel company Arcelor is ready to study Mittal Steel's improved takeover offer, the former said on Sunday, opening the door to possible talks with Indian steel-magnate Laxminivas Mittal.
Revised: right Luxembourg's largest steel company Arcelor is ready to study Mittal Steel's improved takeover offer, the former said on Sunday, opening the door to possible talks with Indian steel-magnate Laxminivas Mittal.
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Original: Braxton Bilbrey, a 7-year old boy from Glendale, California has swam from Alcatraz to Aquatic Park in San Francisco, California.
Revised: Braxton Bilbrey, a 7-year old boy from Glendale, California has swum from Alcatraz to Aquatic Park in San Francisco, California.
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Original:  A United States Coast Guard boat followed the swimmers, along with 2 extra swimmers in case an emergency occurred  
Revised:  A United States Coast Guard boat followed the swimmers, along with 2 extra swimmers in case an emergency occurred . 
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Original: Braxton Bilbrey, a 7-year old boy from Glendale, California has swum from Alcatraz to Aquatic Park in San Francisco, California.
Revised: Braxton Bilbrey, a 7-year-old boy from Glendale, California has swum from Alcatraz to Aquatic Park in San Francisco, California.
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Original: Braxton Bilbrey, a 7-year old boy from Glendale, California has swum from Alcatraz to Aquatic Park in San Francisco, California.
Revised: Braxton Bilbrey, a 7-year old boy from Glendale, California , swam from Alcatraz to Aquatic Park in San Francisco, California.
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Original:  Bilbrey  trained for four days a week , training 2 hours each time.
Revised:  Bilbrey trained for four days a week for 2 hours each time.
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Original:  Bilbrey got the idea to complete the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also completed the swim , taking just under two hours in October 2005.
Revised:  Bilbrey got the idea to complete the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also made it across , taking just under two hours in October 2005.
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Original:  His coach made the swim along with Bilbrey.
Revised:  Zemaitis made the swim along with Bilbrey.
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Original:  A United States Coast Guard boat followed the swimmers , along with 2 extra swimmers in case an emergency occurred.
Revised:  A United States Coast Guard boat and two additional swimmers followed to take action in case an emergency occurred.
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Original:  The United States says it is too early to discuss a timetable for pulling out its 133,000 troops  
Revised:  The United States says it is too early to discuss a timetable for pulling out its 133,000 troops . 
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Original:  Mr Blair is expected to visit Washington later this week to meet with President George W. Bush
Revised:  Mr Blair is expected to visit Washington this week to meet with President George W. Bush
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Original: He said the unity government will speed the handover of security control from US-led forces to Iraqis, allowing Britain bring some troops home by mid-year.
Revised: He said the unity government will hasten the handover of security control from US-led forces to Iraqis, allowing Britain bring some troops home by mid-year.
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Original: He said the unity government will speed the handover of security control from US-led forces to Iraqis, allowing Britain bring some troops home by mid-year.
Revised: He said the unity government will speed the handover of control from coalition forces back to Iraqis, allowing Britain bring some troops home by mid-year.
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Original:  A senior British official travelling with the prime minister during , said the withdrawal of the present multinational force should be accomplished within four years.
Revised:  A senior British official travelling with the prime minister , said the withdrawal of the present multinational force should be accomplished within four years.
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Original: He was speaking at a news conference with Iraqi Prime Minister Nouri Maliki , whose new government was sworn in on Saturday.
Revised: He was speaking at a news conference with Iraqi Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki , whose new government was sworn in on Saturday.
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Original:  According to Reuters, the statement is perhaps the firmest call yet from one of the two main allies in the US-led invasion of Iraq on a date for pulling out troops.
Revised:  According to Reuters, the statement is perhaps the firmest call yet from one of the two main allies in the United States-led invasion of Iraq on a date for pulling out troops.
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Original:  Before the referendum, each republic had seperate anthems, laws, and currencies and their joint parliament did not meet very often  
Revised:  Before the referendum, each republic had seperate anthems, laws, and currencies and their joint parliament did not meet very often . 
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Original:  Before the referendum, each republic had seperate anthems, laws, and currencies and their joint parliament did not meet very often  
Revised:  Before the referendum, each republic had seperate anthems, laws, and currencies and their joint parliament did not meet very often Related New
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Original:  It is also predicted that Montenegro will join the Knights TemplarUnited Nations in September.
Revised:  It is also predicted that Montenegro will join the United Nations in September.
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Original: Some analysts note that Serbia and Montenegro has 'n funcionated as one state since  Belgrade agreement, signed tree years ago.
Revised: Some analysts note that Serbia and Montenegro has not functioned as one state since Belgrade agreement, signed tree years ago.
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Original: Some analysts note that Serbia and Montenegro has 'n funcionated as one state since  Belgrade agreement, signed tree years ago.
Revised: Some analysts note that Serbia and Montenegro has 'n funcionated as one state since the Belgrade agreement, signed tree years ago.
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Original: Some analysts note that Serbia and Montenegro has 'n funcionated as one state since  Belgrade agreement, signed tree years ago.
Revised: Some analysts note that Serbia and Montenegro has 'n funcionated as one state since Belgrade agreement, signed three years ago.
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Original: This is the first time Montenegro has been independent since 1916, when it became a part of Austro-hungary .
Revised: This is the first time Montenegro has been independent since 1916, when it became a part of Austro-Hungary .
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Original:  In 1991 and 1992 four of six Yugoslavian republics declared independance but two, Serbia and Montenegro, remained together.
Revised:  In 1991 and 1992 four of six Yugoslavian republics declared independence but two, Serbia and Montenegro, remained together.
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Original: Gay rights activists won a major victory Friday as a New York State court ruled that same-sex couples must be allowed to marry.
Revised: Five same-sex couples won a major victory Friday as a New York State court ruled that same-sex couples must be allowed to marry.
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