wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  If we continue on our current pattern, Dr. James E. Hansen, professor at Columbia University and the head of the Goddard Institute for Space Studies , believes  this warming could be as much as five degrees in the next thirty years and ten to fourteen degrees over the course of this century.
Revised:  Dr. James E. Hansen, professor at Columbia University and the head of the Goddard Institute for Space Studies , believes this warming could be as much as five degrees in the next thirty years and ten to fourteen degrees over the course of this century.
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Original:  If we continue on our current pattern, Dr. James E. Hansen, professor at Columbia University and the head of the Goddard Institute for Space Studies , believes  this warming could be as much as five degrees in the next thirty years and ten to fourteen degrees over the course of this century.
Revised:  If we continue on our current pattern, Dr. James E. Hansen, professor at Columbia University and the head of the Goddard Institute for Space Studies , believes this warming could be as much as five degrees in the next thirty years and ten to fourteen degrees over the course of the century.
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Original:  Such a temperature rise would be devastating to life on Earth, likely bringing on a cascade of self-promoting warming effects.
Revised:  Such a temperature rise would devastate life on Earth, likely bringing on a cascade of self-promoting warming effects.
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Original:  Such a temperature rise would be devastating to life on Earth, likely bringing on a cascade of self-promoting warming effects.
Revised:  Such a temperature rise would be devastating to life on Earth, likely bringing on a cascade of self-reinforcing warming effects.
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Original:  Earth's forests drying and burning, a steady thawing of the Greenland and arctic ice sheets, and ( most dangerous of all ) a release of the methane hydrates that are now frozen at the bottom of the oceans  could remake the planet into something that is very inhospitable to human life.
Revised:  Earth's forests drying and burning, a steady thawing of the Greenland and arctic ice sheets, and , most dangerous of all ) a release of the methane hydrates that are now frozen at the bottom of the oceans could remake the planet into something that is very inhospitable to human life.
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Original:  Earth's forests drying and burning, a steady thawing of the Greenland and arctic ice sheets, and ( most dangerous of all ) a release of the methane hydrates that are now frozen at the bottom of the oceans  could remake the planet into something that is very inhospitable to human life.
Revised:  Earth's forests drying and burning, a steady thawing of the Greenland and arctic ice sheets, and ( most dangerous of all , a release of the methane hydrates that are now frozen at the bottom of the oceans could remake the planet into something that is very inhospitable to human life.
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Original:  Earth's forests drying and burning, a steady thawing of the Greenland and arctic ice sheets, and ( most dangerous of all ) a release of the methane hydrates that are now frozen at the bottom of the oceans  could remake the planet into something that is very inhospitable to human life.
Revised:  Earth's forests drying and burning, a steady thawing of the Greenland and arctic ice sheets, and ( most dangerous of all ) a release of the methane hydrates that are now frozen at the bottom of the oceans , could remake the planet into something that is very inhospitable to human life.
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Original:  Earth's forests drying and burning, a steady thawing of the Greenland and arctic ice sheets, and ( most dangerous of all ) a release of the methane hydrates that are now frozen at the bottom of the oceans  could remake the planet into something that is very inhospitable to human life.
Revised:  Earth's forests drying and burning, a steady thawing of the Greenland and arctic ice sheets, and ( most dangerous of all ) a release of the methane hydrates that are now frozen at the bottom of the oceans could remake the planet into something inhospitable to human life.
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Original:  Dr. Hansen warns that his research shows that man has just 10 years to reduce greenhouse gases before global warming and other responses to human activity by Earth's climate reach what he calls a tipping point, and becomes unstoppable
Revised:  Dr. Hansen warns that , according to his research, man has just 10 years to reduce greenhouse gases before global warming and other responses to human activity by Earth's climate reach what he calls a tipping point, and becomes unstoppable
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Original:  Dr. Hansen warns that his research shows that man has just 10 years to reduce greenhouse gases before global warming and other responses to human activity by Earth's climate reach what he calls a tipping point, and becomes unstoppable
Revised:  Dr. Hansen warns that his research shows that man has just 10 years to reduce greenhouse gases before global warming and other responses to human activity by Earth's climate reach a "tipping point", becoming unstoppable
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Original: More recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomenon of an observed reduction of sunlight reaching Earth's surface—  nearly a 10\% decline since 1960.
Revised: More recently , atmospheric scientists have come upon the phenomenon of an observed reduction of sunlight reaching Earth's surface— nearly a 10\% decline since 1960.
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Original: More recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomenon of an observed reduction of sunlight reaching Earth's surface—  nearly a 10\% decline since 1960.
Revised: More recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomenon of the reduction of sunlight reaching Earth's surface— nearly a 10\% decline since 1960.
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Original: More recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomenon of an observed reduction of sunlight reaching Earth's surface—  nearly a 10\% decline since 1960.
Revised: More recently come into focus for many atmospheric scientists is the phenomenon of an observed reduction of sunlight reaching Earth's surface— observing a nearly a 10\% decline since 1960.
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Original:  Over the last thirty years, Earth's temperature has increased by about one  to one and  half degrees Fahrenheit.
Revised:  Over the last thirty years, Earth's temperature has increased by about one , to one and half degrees Fahrenheit.
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Original:  Over the last thirty years, Earth's temperature has increased by about one  to one and  half degrees Fahrenheit.
Revised:  Over the last thirty years, Earth's temperature has increased by about one to one and a half degrees Fahrenheit.
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Original:  Without global dimming, however,  Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting  a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
Revised:  In the absence of global dimming, however, Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
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Original:  Without global dimming, however,  Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting  a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
Revised:  Without global dimming, however, the Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
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Original:  Without global dimming, however,  Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting  a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
Revised:  Without global dimming, however, Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting that a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
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Original:  Without global dimming, however,  Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting  a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
Revised:  Without global dimming, however, Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting a "tug-of-war" exists between greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
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Original:  Without global dimming, however,  Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting  a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulate released by burning fossil fuels.
Revised:  Without global dimming, however, Earth might be two to three degrees warmer than it currently is, suggesting a "tug-of-war" between the greenhouse gases and particulates released by burning fossil fuels.
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Original: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired a NOVA program titled “Dimming the Earth”, which presented research by leading scientists on the complex and chaotic systems of our global climate and human activity's effect on it.
Revised: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired a NOVA program titled “Dimming the Earth”, which presented research by leading scientists on the complex systems of our global climate and human activity's effect on it.
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Original:  This has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect, and is now understood to be due to the way these aerosols act upon clouds.
Revised:  This has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect, and is probably due to the way these aerosols act upon clouds.
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Original:  He was believed to have been killed in Khar, a town in the tribal district of Bajaur,  while at a checkpoint when he opened fire on security officials while inside a car.
Revised:  He was believed to have been killed in Khar, a town in the tribal district of Bajaur, Pakistan while at a checkpoint when he opened fire on security officials while inside a car.
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Original: Image:LocationPakistan.png|Location of Pakistan in region ] According to Major-General Shaukat Sultan, a Saudi Arabian man named Abu Marwan al-Suri, 38, a suspected senior al-Qaeda "bag man", was killed in a shootout on Thursday.
Revised: Image:LocationPakistan.png|Location of Pakistan ] According to Major-General Shaukat Sultan, a Saudi Arabian man named Abu Marwan al-Suri, 38, a suspected senior al-Qaeda "bag man", was killed in a shootout on Thursday.
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Original: Ayman al-Zawahiri Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan, against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
Revised:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan, against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
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Original:  It is believed he has been killed  in Khar, a town in the tribal district of Bajaur, Pakistan while at a checkpoint when he opened fire on security officials while inside a car.
Revised:  It is believed he has been killed at a checkpoint in Khar, a town in the tribal district of Bajaur, Pakistan while at a checkpoint when he opened fire on security officials while inside a car.
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Original:  It is believed he has been killed  in Khar, a town in the tribal district of Bajaur, Pakistan while at a checkpoint when he opened fire on security officials while inside a car.
Revised:  It is believed he has been killed in Khar, a town in the tribal district of Bajaur, Pakistan , when he opened fire on security officials while inside a car.
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Original:  It is believed he has been killed  in Khar, a town in the tribal district of Bajaur, Pakistan while at a checkpoint when he opened fire on security officials while inside a car.
Revised:  It is believed he has been killed in Khar, a town in the tribal district of Bajaur, Pakistan while at a checkpoint when he opened fire on security officials from inside a car.
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Original:  According to Sultan, when al-Suri was asked to stop his car , he opened fire . Al-Suri wounded two people and killed one Pakistani security official.
Revised:  According to Sultan, al-Suri was asked to stop his car , he opened fire . Al-Suri wounded two people and killed one Pakistani security official.
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Original:  According to Sultan, when al-Suri was asked to stop his car , he opened fire . Al-Suri wounded two people and killed one Pakistani security official.
Revised:  According to Sultan, when al-Suri opened fire when asked to stop his car , he opened fire . Al-Suri wounded two people and killed one Pakistani security official.
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Original:  According to Sultan, when al-Suri was asked to stop his car , he opened fire . Al-Suri wounded two people and killed one Pakistani security official.
Revised:  According to Sultan, when al-Suri was asked to stop his car . Al-Suri wounded two people and killed one Pakistani security official.
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Original:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in  the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
Revised:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials targeted in a United States lead airstrike in the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
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Original:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in  the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
Revised:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in January in the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
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Original:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in  the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
Revised:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in the Damadola village of Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
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Original:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in  the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
Revised:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
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Original:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in  the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
Revised:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri , which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
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Original:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in  the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several other militants.
Revised:  Al-Suri is believed to be one of several senior al-Qaeda officials that were targeted in an United States lead airstrike in the Damadola village in Bajaur, Pakistan , against Ayman al-Zawahiri in January which killed at least 18 civilians and several militants.
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Original:  Suri was also believed to be giving money to the families of Iraqi militant leader Abu Musab al-Zarqawi and other militants in Afghanistan and Pakistan.
Revised:  Suri was also believed to be giving money to the families of Iraqi militant leader Abu Musab al-Zarqawi as well as other militants in Afghanistan and Pakistan.
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Original:  Pakistani officials say they have his body and that it will undergo testing to determine the true identity at a hospital in the city of Peshawar.
Revised:  Pakistani officials say they have his body and that it will be examined to determine its true identity at a hospital in the city of Peshawar.
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Original: Image:LocationPakistan.png|Location of Pakistan]] According to Major-General Shaukat Sultan, a Saudi Arabian man named Abu Marwan al-Suri, 38, a suspected senior al-Qaeda "bag man", was killed in a shootout on Thursday  .
Revised: Image:LocationPakistan.png|Location of Pakistan]] A Saudi Arabian man named Abu Marwan al-Suri, 38, a suspected senior al-Qaeda "bag man", was killed in a shootout on Thursday .
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Original: Image:LocationPakistan.png|Location of Pakistan]] According to Major-General Shaukat Sultan, a Saudi Arabian man named Abu Marwan al-Suri, 38, a suspected senior al-Qaeda "bag man", was killed in a shootout on Thursday  .
Revised: Image:LocationPakistan.png|Location of Pakistan]] According to Major-General Shaukat Sultan, a Saudi Arabian man named Abu Marwan al-Suri, 38, suspected of being a senior al-Qaeda "bag man", was killed in a shootout on Thursday .
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Original:  Wenyi was charged with " disturbing the peace ".
Revised:  Wenyi was charged with disturbing the peace ".
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Original:  Wenyi was charged with " disturbing the peace ".
Revised:  Wenyi was charged with " disturbing the peace .
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Original:  Wenyi was charged with  disturbing the peace .
Revised:  Wenyi was charged with ' disturbing the peace .
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Original:  Wenyi was charged with ' disturbing the peace ' for making rude and inconsiderate remarks for the purpose of embarrassing China's president.
Revised:  Wenyi was charged with disturbing the peace ' for making rude and inconsiderate remarks for the purpose of embarrassing China's president.
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Original:  Wenyi was charged with ' disturbing the peace ' for making rude and inconsiderate remarks for the purpose of embarrassing China's president.
Revised:  Wenyi was charged with ' disturbing the peace for her remarks against China's president.
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Original:   The first amendment to the U.S. constitution states;
Revised:  "It's making the First Amendment rights of all Americans just evaporate," he said, while he said Wang's remarks were "relatively innocuous." The first amendment to the U.S. constitution states;
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Original:  Wenyi was charged with 'disturbing the peace' for making rude and inconsiderate remarks for the purpose of embarrassing China's president.
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Original:  "Congress shall make no law …
Revised:  "Congress shall make no law ...
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Original:  abridging the freedom of speech …
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Original:  The Prime Minister of India Manmohan Singh, speaker of the Indian parliament Somanath Chaterjee and the President of India A P J Abdul Kalam have expressed shock over the attack.
Revised:  The Prime Minister of India Manmohan Singh, speaker of the Indian parliament Somnath Chatterjee and the President of India A P J Abdul Kalam have expressed shock over the attack.
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Original:  Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% MUMBAI: The Bharatiya Janata Party lost one of its most promising second generation leaders when Pramod Mahajan died at the Hinduja Hospital here on Wednesday afternoon.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% MUMBAI: The Bharatiya Janata Party lost one of its most promising second generation leaders when Pramod Mahajan died at the Hinduja Hospital here on Wednesday afternoon.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He was considered a master strategist in the BJP and outside.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Pravin's lawyer maintains his client had been suffering from some mental disorder for the last few months and relations between the two brothers were cordial. mail@ashishkaul.c
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Pravin's lawyer maintains his client had been suffering from some mental disorder for the last few months and relations between the two brothers were cordial. mail@ashishkaul.c
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Pravin's lawyer maintains his client had been suffering from some mental disorder for the last few months and relations between the two brothers were cordial. 
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Original:  Source MUMBAI: The Bharatiya Janata Party lost one of its most promising second generation leaders when Pramod Mahajan died at the Hinduja Hospital here on Wednesday afternoon.
Revised:  MUMBAI: The Bharatiya Janata Party lost one of its most promising second generation leaders when Pramod Mahajan died at the Hinduja Hospital here on Wednesday afternoon.
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Original:  He was considered a master strategist in the BJP and outside.
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Original:  Pravin's lawyer maintains his client had been suffering from some mental disorder for the last few months and relations between the two brothers were cordial.
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Original:  Voters were deciding who to elect to the 275 seat Transisitional National Assembly.
Revised:  Voters were deciding who to elect to the 275 seat Transitional National Assembly.
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Original:  Annan praised the courage of the people and congratualated the Independent Election Commission of Iraq (IECI) and UN officials for successfully running the poll.
Revised:  Annan praised the courage of the people and congratulated the Independent Election Commission of Iraq (IECI) and UN officials for successfully running the poll.
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Original:  The next step will be a referendum in October 2005 on the constitution the Transistional National Assembly will be tasked with drawing up.
Revised:  The next step will be a referendum in October 2005 on the constitution the Transitional National Assembly will be tasked with drawing up.
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Original:  In the Out-of-Country Voting Program, 93.6\% of Iraqis elligible to vote, did so.
Revised:  In the Out-of-Country Voting Program, 93.6\% of Iraqis eligible to vote, did so.
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Original:  A meteorologist with AccuWeather noted in a recent article that the rains could help lessen drought conditions which have plagued the state for months.
Revised:  A meteorologist with AccuWeather noted recently that the rains could help lessen drought conditions which have plagued the state for months.
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