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Original:  With an increasing number of reports relating to patient neglect in hospitals emerging, two trade unions met with the Kenyan government Sunday and negotitated a return to work, although a significant proportion of demonstrators defied the agreement, reported.
Revised:  With an increasing number of reports of patient neglected in hospitals emerging, two trade unions met with the Kenyan government Sunday and negotitated a return to work, although a significant proportion of demonstrators defied the agreement, reported.
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Original:  Kenya Medical Practitioners, Pharmacists and Dentists Union chairperson Dr. Victor Ng'ani described these actions as "reckless".
Revised:  Kenya Medical Practitioners, Pharmacists and Dentists Union chairperson Dr. Victor Ng'ani described government actions as "reckless".
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Original: The workers, who had been on strike for four days, were wishing to have improvements made to their wages, working conditions  and allowances.
Revised: The workers, who had been on strike for four days, were wishing to have improvements made to their wages, working conditions , and allowances.
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Original:  With an increasing number of reports of patient neglected in hospitals emerging, two trade unions met with the Kenyan government Sunday and negotitated a return to work, although a significant proportion of demonstrators defied the agreement, reported.
Revised:  With an increasing number of reports of patients neglected in hospitals emerging, two trade unions met with the Kenyan government Sunday and negotitated a return to work, although a significant proportion of demonstrators defied the agreement, reported.
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Original:  Mutua said the health workers were "no longer employees of the government" and had been eliminated from the list of paid employees .
Revised:  Mutua said the health workers were "no longer employees of the government" and had been eliminated from the payroll .
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Original:  While Ng'ani told  of difficulties with finding other workers as skilled and experienced when speaking to the BBC , Mutua reportedly stated that this would not be an issue.
Revised:  While Ng'ani told the BBC of difficulties with finding other workers as skilled and experienced when speaking to the BBC , Mutua reportedly stated that this would not be an issue.
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Original:  While Ng'ani told  of difficulties with finding other workers as skilled and experienced when speaking to the BBC , Mutua reportedly stated that this would not be an issue.
Revised:  While Ng'ani told of difficulties with finding other workers as skilled and experienced , Mutua reportedly stated that this would not be an issue.
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Original:  "There will be a lag of a day or two ... but it is better than letting people die on the floor, at the gate, or suffer in pain" . A government-run discussion group is set to continue examining their losses, according to The Guardian
Revised:  "There will be a lag of a day or two ... but it is better than letting people die on the floor, at the gate, or suffer in pain" 
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Original:  Fire trucks, ambulances and bomb disposal squads have reportedly reached the site and have cordoned off the area for their operations  
Revised:  Fire trucks, ambulances and bomb disposal squads have reportedly reached the site and have cordoned off the area for their operations Reference
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Original:  Fire trucks, ambulances and bomb disposal squads have reportedly reached the site and have cordoned off the area for their operations.
Revised:  Fire trucks, ambulances and bomb disposal squads reached the site and have cordoned off the area for their operations.
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Original: On April 14 2006, twin blasts rocked the Jama Masjid in Old Delhi (India).
Revised: Twin blasts have rocked the jistoric Jama Masjid in Old Delhi (India).
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Original: Twin blasts have rocked the jistoric Jama Masjid in Old Delhi (India).
Revised: Twin blasts have rocked the historic Jama Masjid in Old Delhi (India).
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Original: Report on Irish Examiner.  
Revised: Report on Irish Examiner. Type of explosive It has been established that the explosives used in the blast were very crude in nature and consisted of Potassium chlorate and Sulphuric acid. These two were separated by a rubber wall. When the acid corroded the rubber to make contact with the Potassuim chlorate on the other side, the explosion was triggered.
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Original:  At least thirteen people were injured in the blasts and at least five have been killed.
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Original: File Picture of the Jama Masjid Twin blasts have rocked the historic Jama Masjid in Old Delhi (India), killing atleast five people and injuring thirteen.
Revised: File Picture of the Jama Masjid Twin blasts have rocked the historic Jama Masjid in Old Delhi (India), killing at least five people and injuring thirteen.
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Original:  If we don't, we'll die.  
Revised:  If we don't, we'll die. " 
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Original:  " As already stated in the findings of the 9/11 Commission, there is nothing to show any passenger ever got into cockpit or fought the terrorists before the plane crashed at 10:03.
Revised:  As already stated in the findings of the 9/11 Commission, there is nothing to show any passenger ever got into cockpit or fought the terrorists before the plane crashed at 10:03.
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Original: The  COSMIC atmospheric research spacecraft launch is likely to be rescheduled to Saturday due to inclement weather.
Revised: The w: COSMIC atmospheric research spacecraft launch is likely to be rescheduled to Saturday due to inclement weather.
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Original:   COSMIC is currently scheduled to launch tonight between 5:10 and 8:20 p.m. PDT (Saturday 0010 to 0320 UTC ).
Revised:  w: COSMIC is currently scheduled to launch tonight between 5:10 and 8:20 p.m. PDT (Saturday 0010 to 0320 UTC ).
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Original:  The Air Force launch weather team at  Vandenberg Air Force Base is predicting a 70\% chance that weather conditions will prohibit the launch from happening tonight.
Revised:  The Air Force launch weather team at w: Vandenberg Air Force Base is predicting a 70\% chance that weather conditions will prohibit the launch from happening tonight.
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Original:  The Air Force launch weather team at w: Vandenberg Air Force Base is predicting a 70\% chance that weather conditions will prohibit the launch from happening tonight.
Revised:  The Air Force launch weather team at Vandenberg Air Force Base is predicting a 70\% chance that weather conditions will prohibit the launch from happening tonight.
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Original:  however, the body of Atwah has not yet been found and the identities of those killed are not yet known.
Revised:  however, the body of Atwah has not yet been found and the identities of the others killed are not yet known.
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Original:  At least eight other terrorists, both foreign and of Pakistani decent, were  believed to have been killed in the strike;
Revised:  At least eight other terrorists, both foreign and of Pakistani decent, were also believed to have been killed in the strike;
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Original:  At least eight other  terrorists, both foreign and of Pakistani decent, were also believed to have been killed in the strike.
Revised:  At least eight other alleged terrorists, both foreign and of Pakistani decent, were also believed to have been killed in the strike.
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Original:  Atwah, also known as Abdul Rahman Al- Muhajir, Muhammad K.A. and Abdel Rahman, is believed to be responsible for the bombings of the American Embassies in Kenya and Tanzania on August 7, 1998 which killed 20 Americans and at least 200 Africans.
Revised:  Atwah, also known as Abdul Rahman Al- Muhajir, Muhammad K.A. and Abdel Rahman, is accused of being responsible for the bombings of the American Embassies in Kenya and Tanzania on August 7, 1998 which killed 20 Americans and at least 200 Africans.
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Original:  However, it is believed that associates of the  terrorists killed removed the bodies and buried them in an unidentified location, but at least four tribesmen that were killed were buried in the town's cemetery.
Revised:  However, it is believed that associates of the alleged terrorists killed removed the bodies and buried them in an unidentified location, but at least four tribesmen that were killed were buried in the town's cemetery.
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Original:  At least eight other alleged terrorists, both foreign and of Pakistani decent , were also believed to have been killed in the strike.
Revised:  At least eight other alleged terrorists, both foreign and of Pakistani descent , were also believed to have been killed in the strike.
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Original:  Atwah, also known as Abdul Rahman Al- Muhajir , Muhammad K.A. and Abdel Rahman, is accused of being responsible for the bombings of the American Embassies in Kenya and Tanzania on August 7, 1998 which killed 20 Americans and at least 200 Africans.
Revised:  Atwah, also known as Abdul Rahman Al-Muhajir , Muhammad K.A. and Abdel Rahman, is accused of being responsible for the bombings of the American Embassies in Kenya and Tanzania on August 7, 1998 which killed 20 Americans and at least 200 Africans.
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Original:  Atwah, also known as Abdul Rahman Al- Muhajir , Muhammad K.A. and Abdel Rahman, is accused of being responsible for the bombings of the American Embassies in Kenya and Tanzania on August 7, 1998 which killed 20 Americans and at least 200 Africans.
Revised:  Atwah, also known as Abdul Rahman Al- Muhajir , Muhammad K.A. and Abdel Rahman, is accused of being responsible for the bombings of the American embassies in Kenya and Tanzania on August 7, 1998 which killed 20 Americans and at least 200 Africans.
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Original: Despite over 100 people in the UK having died from eating BSE infected beef, the EU has stated that eating goat products is still safe due to precautionary measures which have been put in place.
Revised: The EU has stated that eating goat products is still safe due to precautionary measures which have been put in place.
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Original:  Scientists origanly thought that the goat was suffering from scrapie, another degenerative disease that can be found in goats and sheep.
Revised:  Scientists originally thought that the goat was suffering from scrapie, another degenerative disease that can be found in goats and sheep.
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Original: Mamdouh Habib, the former Guantanmo Bay detainee has arrived back in Australia  after having been held in the US navy base for three years .
Revised: Mamdouh Habib, a former Guantanmo Bay detainee has arrived back in Australia after having been held in the US navy base for three years .
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Original: Mamdouh Habib, the former Guantanmo Bay detainee has arrived back in Australia  after having been held in the US navy base for three years .
Revised: Mamdouh Habib, the former Guantanmo Bay detainee , arrived back in Australia after having been held in the US navy base for three years .
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Original:  In a statement through his Australian lawyer, Stephen Hopper, the Habib family thanked the Australian people during Mr . Habib's incarereation.
Revised:  In a statement through his Australian lawyer, Stephen Hopper, the Habib family thanked the Australian people during Mr Habib's incarereation.
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Original:  The statement also offered thanks for the work of Mr . Habib's American lawyer saying, "Most of all we'd like to thank Joe Margulies for his excellent efforts . " it then went on to say that as far as Mr.Habbib was concerned " Joe's the best lawyer in the world." Mr . Habib was detained by Coalition forces in Afgahnistan three weeks after the September 11 attacks on the World Trade Center in New York, on suspicion of having link to Osama bin Laden and the Al Qaeda terrorist group.
Revised:  The statement also offered thanks for the work of Mr Habib's American lawyer saying, "Most of all we'd like to thank Joe Margulies for his excellent efforts . " it then went on to say that as far as Mr.Habbib was concerned " Joe's the best lawyer in the world." Mr . Habib was detained by Coalition forces in Afgahnistan three weeks after the September 11 attacks on the World Trade Center in New York, on suspicion of having link to Osama bin Laden and the Al Qaeda terrorist group.
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Original:  The statement also offered thanks for the work of Mr . Habib's American lawyer saying, "Most of all we'd like to thank Joe Margulies for his excellent efforts . " it then went on to say that as far as Mr.Habbib was concerned " Joe's the best lawyer in the world." Mr . Habib was detained by Coalition forces in Afgahnistan three weeks after the September 11 attacks on the World Trade Center in New York, on suspicion of having link to Osama bin Laden and the Al Qaeda terrorist group.
Revised:  The statement also offered thanks for the work of Mr . Habib's American lawyer saying, "Most of all we'd like to thank Joe Margulies for his excellent efforts . .. Joe's the best lawyer in the world." Mr . Habib was detained by Coalition forces in Afgahnistan three weeks after the September 11 attacks on the World Trade Center in New York, on suspicion of having link to Osama bin Laden and the Al Qaeda terrorist group.
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Original:  The statement also offered thanks for the work of Mr . Habib's American lawyer saying, "Most of all we'd like to thank Joe Margulies for his excellent efforts . " it then went on to say that as far as Mr.Habbib was concerned " Joe's the best lawyer in the world." Mr . Habib was detained by Coalition forces in Afgahnistan three weeks after the September 11 attacks on the World Trade Center in New York, on suspicion of having link to Osama bin Laden and the Al Qaeda terrorist group.
Revised:  The statement also offered thanks for the work of Mr . Habib's American lawyer saying, "Most of all we'd like to thank Joe Margulies for his excellent efforts . " it then went on to say that as far as Mr.Habbib was concerned " Joe's the best lawyer in the world." Mr Habib was detained by Coalition forces in Afgahnistan three weeks after the September 11 attacks on the World Trade Center in New York, on suspicion of having link to Osama bin Laden and the Al Qaeda terrorist group.
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Original:  The statement also offered thanks for the work of Mr . Habib's American lawyer saying, "Most of all we'd like to thank Joe Margulies for his excellent efforts . " it then went on to say that as far as Mr.Habbib was concerned " Joe's the best lawyer in the world." Mr . Habib was detained by Coalition forces in Afgahnistan three weeks after the September 11 attacks on the World Trade Center in New York, on suspicion of having link to Osama bin Laden and the Al Qaeda terrorist group.
Revised:  The statement also offered thanks for the work of Mr . Habib's American lawyer saying, "Most of all we'd like to thank Joe Margulies for his excellent efforts . " it then went on to say that as far as Mr.Habbib was concerned " Joe's the best lawyer in the world." Mr . Habib was detained by Coalition forces in Afgahnistan three weeks after the September 11 attacks on the World Trade Center in New York, on suspicion of having links to Osama bin Laden and the Al Qaeda terrorist group.
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Original:  "She may not remember the attack at all," said Dan Hicksa spokesman for the state's Wildlife Resources Agency .
Revised:  "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks .
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Original:  A six-year-old girl was killed after a Black Bear attacked her  mother and two-year-old brother  .
Revised:  A six-year-old girl was killed after a Black Bear attacked her . Her mother and two-year-old brother .
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Original:  Her mother and two-year-old brother  also attacked, were critically injured.
Revised:  Her mother and two-year-old brother , also attacked, were critically injured.
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Original:  According to recusers , the girl managed to escape from the bear, but was found only an hour later by a rescuer who fired shots which scared the bear away.
Revised:  According to rescuers , the girl managed to escape from the bear, but was found only an hour later by a rescuer who fired shots which scared the bear away.
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Original:  "Allegedly, after the rescue squad found the little girl, one of the squad members fired a shot from a small-calibre handgun.
Revised:  "Allegedly, after the rescue squad found the little girl, one of the squad members fired a shot from a small-caliber handgun.
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Original:  There was no blood, but it chased off," said Dan Hicks  a spokesman for the states Wildlife Resources Agency.
Revised:  There was no blood, but it chased off," said Dan Hicks , a spokesman for the states Wildlife Resources Agency.
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Original: Officials have baited traps with honey buns and doughnuts to try and catch the bear.
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Original:  A six-year-old girl was killed after a Black Bear attacked her.
Revised:  A six-year-old girl was killed after a black bear attacked her.
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Original:  The family was visitng a nearby waterfall when they were attacked.
Revised:  The family was visiting a nearby waterfall when they were attacked.
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Original:  Investigators , so far, have not been able to speak to the mother because her injuries are too severe . "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks .
Revised:  Investigators have not yet been able to speak to the mother because her injuries are too severe . "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks .
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Original:  Investigators , so far, have not been able to speak to the mother because her injuries are too severe . "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks .
Revised:  Investigators , so far, have not been able to speak to the mother because of the severity of her injuries . "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks .
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Original:  Authorities have not yet released the names of the victims and the campground has been closed
Revised:  Authorities have not yet released the names of the victims . The campground has been closed
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Original:  According to the report, the victim, Kahtani was made to stand naked in front of a american woman torturer and accused of being a homosexual, forced to wear women's underwear and to perform "dog tricks" on a leash.
Revised:  According to the report, the victim, Kahtani was made to stand naked in front of a female American interrogator and accused of being a homosexual, forced to wear women's underwear and to perform "dog tricks" on a leash.
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Original:  United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld let an "abusive and degrading" interrogation happen in 2002 said the online magazine Salon on Friday , citing an Army document obtained through a Freedom of Information Act request . Salon quoted a December 2005 Army inspector general's report where officers told of Rumsfeld's direct contact with the overseeing general at the U.S. naval base at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba.
Revised: According to the online magazine Salon on Friday, United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld let an "abusive and degrading" interrogation happen in 2002 said the online magazine Salon on Friday , citing an Army document obtained through a Freedom of Information Act request . Salon quoted a December 2005 Army inspector general's report where officers told of Rumsfeld's direct contact with the overseeing general at the U.S. naval base at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba.
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Original:  United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld let an "abusive and degrading" interrogation happen in 2002 said the online magazine Salon on Friday , citing an Army document obtained through a Freedom of Information Act request . Salon quoted a December 2005 Army inspector general's report where officers told of Rumsfeld's direct contact with the overseeing general at the U.S. naval base at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba.
Revised:  United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld let an "abusive and degrading" interrogation happen in 2002 , citing an Army document obtained through a Freedom of Information Act request . Salon quoted a December 2005 Army inspector general's report where officers told of Rumsfeld's direct contact with the overseeing general at the U.S. naval base at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba.
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Original:  United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld let an "abusive and degrading" interrogation happen in 2002 said the online magazine Salon on Friday , citing an Army document obtained through a Freedom of Information Act request . Salon quoted a December 2005 Army inspector general's report where officers told of Rumsfeld's direct contact with the overseeing general at the U.S. naval base at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba.
Revised:  United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld let an "abusive and degrading" interrogation happen in 2002 said the online magazine Salon on Friday , citing an Army document obtained through a Freedom of Information Act request as its source. The magazine quoted a December 2005 Army inspector general's report where officers told of Rumsfeld's direct contact with the overseeing general at the U.S. naval base at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba.
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Original:  According to the report , the victim, Mohammed al-Kahtani, was made to stand naked in front of a female American interrogator and accused of being a homosexual, forced to wear women's underwear and to perform "dog tricks" on a leash and went though 18-20 hours of interrogation per day during 48 of 45 days.
Revised:  According to the article , the victim, Mohammed al-Kahtani, was made to stand naked in front of a female American interrogator and accused of being a homosexual, forced to wear women's underwear and to perform "dog tricks" on a leash and went though 18-20 hours of interrogation per day during 48 of 45 days.
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Original:  Salon cites Army investigator Lt. Gen. Randall Schmidt's statement, which was mad uder oath, that he concluded that although Rumsfeld did not specifically order the interrogation methods used on Kahtani, the open-ended policies approved by Rumsfeld paired with lack of supervision of day-to-day interrogations permitted the abusive conduct to take place.
Revised:  Salon cites Army investigator Lt. Gen. Randall Schmidt's statement, which was made uder oath, that he concluded that although Rumsfeld did not specifically order the interrogation methods used on Kahtani, the open-ended policies approved by Rumsfeld paired with lack of supervision of day-to-day interrogations permitted the abusive conduct to take place.
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Original:  He considers this to be a disadvantage for Mac developers, who are responsible for making software already available for Windows for the Macintosh operating syste
Revised:  He considers this to be a disadvantage for Mac developers, who are responsible for making software already available for Windows for the Macintosh operating system
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Original:  in which the user opts for loading under Mac OS or Windows Last week, Apple Computer released a program for their Mac OS operating system called Boot Camp Assistant, which will allow for booting of Microsoft Windows.
Revised:  in which the user opts for loading under Mac OS or Windows Last week, Apple Computer released a program for their Mac OS operating system called Boot Camp Assistant, which will allow Macs to boot Microsoft Windows.
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Original:  The software was released as a Beta version for Apple computers powered on the Intel architecture, which is also used by Windows.
Revised:  The software was released as a beta version for Apple computers powered on the Intel architecture, which is also used by Windows.
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