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Original:  A major contribution to the development of the literature of Financial Gerontology was the publication in 1996 of the Encyclopedia of Financial Gerontology edited by Dr. Lois Vitt and Dr. Jurg Siegenthaler.
Revised:  A major contribution to the development of the literature of Financial Gerontology was the publication in 1996 of the Encyclopedia of Financial Gerontology edited by Dr. Lois Vitt and Jurg Siegenthaler.
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Original:  In 2003, an expanded edition of the encyclopedia was published under the title Encyclopedia of Retirement and Finance edited by Dr. Lois Vitt.
Revised:  In 2003, an expanded edition of the encyclopedia was published under the title Encyclopedia of Retirement and Finance edited by Lois Vitt.
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Original:  As Dr. Vitt writes in the Preface: "My experience in consumer financial education during the past several years led to this revised edition, which has been expanded to include many additional topics about preretirement and retirement issues.
Revised:  As Vitt writes in the Preface: "My experience in consumer financial education during the past several years led to this revised edition, which has been expanded to include many additional topics about preretirement and retirement issues.
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Original:  Financial Gerontology as professional education The Bimonthly Financial Gerontology Column The Journal of Financial Service Professionals, established in 1946, published bimonthly, is the official journal of the Society of Financial Service Professionals.
Revised:  Financial gerontology as professional education The Bimonthly Financial Gerontology Column The Journal of Financial Service Professionals, established in 1946, published bimonthly, is the official journal of the Society of Financial Service Professionals.
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Original:  Financial Gerontology as professional education The Bimonthly Financial Gerontology Column The Journal of Financial Service Professionals, established in 1946, published bimonthly, is the official journal of the Society of Financial Service Professionals.
Revised:  Financial Gerontology as professional education Bimonthly financial gerontology column The Journal of Financial Service Professionals, established in 1946, published bimonthly, is the official journal of the Society of Financial Service Professionals.
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Original:  In the November 1990 issue of the Journal of the American Society of CLU and ChFC, President-Emeritus of the American College of Life Underwriters, Davis W. Gregg, Ph.D, introduced a new continuing column ("Department") titled "Financial Gerontology" with his essay on the Human Wealth Span.
Revised:  In the November 1990 issue of the Journal of the American Society of CLU and ChFC, President-Emeritus of the American College of Life Underwriters, Davis W. Gregg, introduced a new continuing column ("Department") titled "Financial Gerontology" with his essay on the Human Wealth Span.
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Original:  Multiple Columns, Multiple Topics The American Institute of Financial Gerontology The idea for a formal educational program in Financial Gerontology emerged starting around 1999 from the experience of two gerontology researchers-teachers, Neal Cutler and John Migliaccio.
Revised:  Multiple columns, multiple topics The American Institute of Financial Gerontology The idea for a formal educational program in Financial Gerontology emerged starting around 1999 from the experience of two gerontology researchers-teachers, Neal Cutler and John Migliaccio.
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Original:  Multiple Columns, Multiple Topics The American Institute of Financial Gerontology The idea for a formal educational program in Financial Gerontology emerged starting around 1999 from the experience of two gerontology researchers-teachers, Neal Cutler and John Migliaccio.
Revised:  Multiple Columns, Multiple Topics American Institute of Financial Gerontology The idea for a formal educational program in Financial Gerontology emerged starting around 1999 from the experience of two gerontology researchers-teachers, Neal Cutler and John Migliaccio.
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Original:  Students and Prerequisites The RFG vs.
Revised:  Students and prerequisites The RFG vs.
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Original:  AIFG Core Courses and Electives Core Courses.
Revised:  AIFG core courses and electives Core Courses.
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Original:  AIFG courses, both Core and Electives , are "traditional" in-class face-to-face seminar classes (typically 20-25 students).
Revised:  AIFG courses, both core and electives , are "traditional" in-class face-to-face seminar classes (typically 20-25 students).
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Original:  Faculty Profiles Reflecting the field of Financial Gerontology itself, the AIFG faculty is highly multidisciplinary, including a range of both academic and professional disciplines.
Revised:  Faculty profiles Reflecting the field of Financial Gerontology itself, the AIFG faculty is highly multidisciplinary, including a range of both academic and professional disciplines.
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Original:  Faculty Profiles Reflecting the field of Financial Gerontology itself, the AIFG faculty is highly multidisciplinary, including a range of both academic and professional disciplines.
Revised:  Faculty Profiles Reflecting the field of financial gerontology itself, the AIFG faculty is highly multidisciplinary, including a range of both academic and professional disciplines.
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Original:  International Financial Gerontology Korean Institute of Financial Gerontology Financial Gerontology in China
Revised:  International financial gerontology Korean Institute of Financial Gerontology Financial Gerontology in China
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Original:  International Financial Gerontology Korean Institute of Financial Gerontology Financial Gerontology in China
Revised:  International Financial Gerontology Korean Institute of Financial Gerontology Financial gerontology in China
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Original:  On October 29, 1993, Boettner's "little brother" (fifteen years his junior) passed away .
Revised:  On October 29, 1993, Boettner's "little brother" (fifteen years his junior) died .
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Original:  In addition to the Center the Boettner resources now support a Wharton professorship, first known as the Joseph E. and Ruth E. Boettner Professor of Financial Gerontology, and held by Beth J. Soldo, a demographer and sociologist who was also Director of the Boettner Center.
Revised:  In addition to the Center the Boettner resources now support a Wharton professorship, first known as the Joseph E. and Ruth E. Boettner Professor of Financial Gerontology, and held by Beth Soldo, a demographer and sociologist who was also Director of the Boettner Center.
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Original:  To enter medical school, the MCAT (Medical College Admissions Test) may be required after which medical school is another four years with the first two dedicated to academics and the rest of the two used to gain clinical experience.
Revised:  To enter medical school, the MCAT (Medical College Admissions Test) is usually required after which medical school is another four years with the first two dedicated to academics and the rest of the two used to gain clinical experience.
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Original:  National Academy of Sciences, Strengthening Forensic Science in the United States: A Path Forward, (2009), pp 241–253.
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Original: The coroner is not necessarily  a medical doctor, but  a lawyer, or even a layperson  .
Revised: The coroner is not necessarily a medical doctor, but perhaps a lawyer, or even a layperson .
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Original: The medical examiner is an appointed official in some American jurisdictions who is trained in pathology that investigates deaths that occur under unusual or suspicious circumstances, to perform post-mortem examinations, and in some jurisdictions to initiate inquests.
Revised: The medical examiner is an appointed official in some American jurisdictions who is trained , typically in pathology, that investigates deaths that occur under unusual or suspicious circumstances, to perform post-mortem examinations, and in some jurisdictions to initiate inquests.
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Original:  In the 19th century, the public became dissatisfied with lay coroners and demanded that the coroner be replaced by a physician .
Revised:  In the 19th century, the public became dissatisfied with lay coroners and demanded that the coroner be replaced by aphysician .
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Original:  Commonly, these include violent, suspicious, sudden, and unexpected deaths, death when no physician or practitioner treated recently, inmates in public institutions , in custody of law enforcement, during or immediately following therapeutic or diagnostic procedures, or deaths due to neglect.
Revised:  Commonly, these include violent, suspicious, sudden, and unexpected deaths, death when not having been examined or treated by a physician or other medical practitioner recently, inmates in public institutions , in custody of law enforcement, during or immediately following therapeutic or diagnostic procedures, or deaths due to neglect.
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Original:  Commonly, these include violent, suspicious, sudden, and unexpected deaths, death when no physician or practitioner treated recently, inmates in public institutions , in custody of law enforcement, during or immediately following therapeutic or diagnostic procedures, or deaths due to neglect.
Revised:  Commonly, these include violent, suspicious, sudden, and unexpected deaths, death when no physician or practitioner treated recently, inmates in public institutions while in the custody of law enforcement, during or immediately following therapeutic or diagnostic procedures, or deaths due to neglect.
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Original: The medical examiner is an appointed official in some American jurisdictions who is trained , typically in pathology , that investigates deaths that occur under unusual or suspicious circumstances, to perform post-mortem examinations, and in some jurisdictions to initiate inquests.
Revised: The medical examiner is an appointed official in some American jurisdictions who is trained in pathology that investigates deaths that occur under unusual or suspicious circumstances, to perform post-mortem examinations, and in some jurisdictions to initiate inquests.
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Original:  The coroner is not necessarily (though certainly not prohibited from being) a medical doctor, but perhaps a lawyer, or even a layperson (no formal education or training in the subject) .
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Original:  The coroner is not necessarily (though certainly not prohibited from being) a medical doctor, but perhaps a lawyer, or even a layperson (no formal education or training in the subject) .
Revised:  The coroner is not necessarily (though certainly not prohibited from being) a medical doctor, but a lawyer, or even a layperson (no formal education or training in the subject) .
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Original:  The coroner is not necessarily (though certainly not prohibited from being) a medical doctor, but perhaps a lawyer, or even a layperson (no formal education or training in the subject) .
Revised:  The coroner is not necessarily (though certainly not prohibited from being) a medical doctor, but perhaps a lawyer, or even a layperson .
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Original:  In the 19th century, the public became dissatisfied with lay coroners and demanded that the coroner be replaced by aphysician .
Revised:  In the 19th century, the public became dissatisfied with lay coroners and demanded that the coroner be replaced by a physician .
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Original:  The types of death reportable to the system are determined by federal, state or local ordinances laws.
Revised:  The types of death reportable to the system are determined by federal, state or local laws.
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Original:  Commonly, these include violent, suspicious, sudden, and unexpected deaths, death when not having been examined or treated by a physician or other medical practitioner recently, inmates in public institutions while in the custody of law enforcement, during or immediately following therapeutic or diagnostic procedures, or deaths due to neglect.
Revised:  Commonly, these include violent, suspicious, sudden, and unexpected deaths, death when no physician or practitioner treated recently, inmates in public institutions while in the custody of law enforcement, during or immediately following therapeutic or diagnostic procedures, or deaths due to neglect.
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Original:  Commonly, these include violent, suspicious, sudden, and unexpected deaths, death when not having been examined or treated by a physician or other medical practitioner recently, inmates in public institutions while in the custody of law enforcement, during or immediately following therapeutic or diagnostic procedures, or deaths due to neglect.
Revised:  Commonly, these include violent, suspicious, sudden, and unexpected deaths, death when not having been examined or treated by a physician or other medical practitioner recently, inmates in public institutions , in custody of law enforcement, during or immediately following therapeutic or diagnostic procedures, or deaths due to neglect.
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Original:  Catechism of the Catholic Church, 76-78 "And Holy%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Tradition transmits in its entirety the Word of God, which has been entrusted to the apostles by Christ the Lord and the Holy Spirit.
Revised:  Catechism of the Catholic Church, 76-78 "And %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Tradition transmits in its entirety the Word of God, which has been entrusted to the apostles by Christ the Lord and the Holy Spirit.
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Original:  Regular gathering for prayer, worship, thanksgiving  and teaching.
Revised:  Regular gathering for prayer, worship, thanksgiving , fellowship and teaching.
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Original:   Care for Christian brothers and sisters and care of the poor.
Revised:  The expression of these traditions differ in a variety of ways resulting in a number of 'denominations'. Care for Christian brothers and sisters and care of the poor.
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Original:   Care for Christian brothers and sisters and care of the poor.
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Original:  Honesty and openness in dealings with each other and in all secular activities   .
Revised:  Honesty in dealings with each other and in all secular activities .
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Original:  Honesty and openness in dealings with each other and in all secular activities   .
Revised:  Honesty and openness in dealings with each other and in all secular activities . .
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Original:  Christian traditions include the following: Holy Communion as a ceremony of remembrance of the death and resurrection of Jesus Christ, as prophesied in the Old Testament and attested to in the New Testament of the Bible.
Revised:  Holy Communion as a ceremony of remembrance of the death and resurrection of Jesus Christ, as prophesied in the Old Testament and attested to in the New Testament of the Bible.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Regular gatherings on Sundays for prayer, worship, thanksgiving, fellowship and teaching . Special gatherings are held to celebrate the birth of Jesus (Christmas), His death (Good Friday) and resurrection (Easter Sunday).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Servant leadership.
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Original:  Honesty in dealings with each other and in all secular activities.
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Original:  born 29 October 1954 in Volodarskoye, Kokchetav Oblast  Kazakhstan) was the president of Ingushetia from March 1993 to December 2001.
Revised:  born 29 October 1954 in Volodarskoye, Kokchetav Oblast , Kazakhstan) was the president of Ingushetia from March 1993 to December 2001.
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Original:   born 29 October 1954 in Volodarskoye, Kokchetav Oblast, Kazakhstan ) was the president of Ingushetia from March 1993 to December 2001.
Revised:  ; born 29 October 1954 in Volodarskoye, Kokchetav Oblast, Kazakhstan ) was the president of Ingushetia from March 1993 to December 2001.
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Original:   born 29 October 1954 in Volodarskoye, Kokchetav Oblast, Kazakhstan ) was the president of Ingushetia from March 1993 to December 2001.
Revised:  born 29 October 1954 ) was the president of Ingushetia from March 1993 to December 2001.
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Original: Members of the Federation Council of Russia (1994–1996) Category:Members of the Federation Council of Russia (1996–2000) Category:Russian lieutenant generals Category:Soviet lieutenant generals Category:Soviet military personnel of the Soviet–Afghan War Category:Moscow theater hostage crisis Category:Beslan school siege Category:Heroes of the Soviet Union Category:Frunze Military Academy alumni Category:Military Academy of the General Staff of the Armed Forces of the Soviet Union alum
Revised: Members of the Federation Council of Russia (1994–1996) Category:Members of the Federation Council of Russia (1996–2000) Category:Russian lieutenant generals Category:Soviet lieutenant generals Category:Soviet military personnel of the Soviet–Afghan War Category:Moscow theater hostage crisis Category:Beslan school siege Category:Heroes of the Soviet Union Category:Frunze Military Academy alumni Category:Military Academy of the General Staff of the Armed Forces of the Soviet Union alumni Category:Members of the Federation Council of Russia (after 200
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Original:  Petersburg website Profile at the official Russian Premier League website
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Original: Honours Club Amkar Perm Russian Second Division (1) : 1998 Zenit St.
Revised: Honours Club Amkar Perm Russian Second Division : 1998 Zenit St.
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Original:  Petersburg Russian Premier League (3) : 2007, 2010, 2011–12 Russian Cup (1): 2010 Russian Super Cup (2 ): 2008, 2011 UEFA Cup (1) : 2007–08 UEFA Super Cup (1) : 2008
Revised:  Petersburg Russian Premier League : 2007, 2010, 2011–12 Russian Cup (1): 2010 Russian Super Cup (2 ): 2008, 2011 UEFA Cup (1) : 2007–08 UEFA Super Cup (1) : 2008
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Original:  Petersburg Russian Premier League (3) : 2007, 2010, 2011–12 Russian Cup (1): 2010 Russian Super Cup (2 ): 2008, 2011 UEFA Cup (1) : 2007–08 UEFA Super Cup (1) : 2008
Revised:  Petersburg Russian Premier League (3) : 2007, 2010, 2011–12 Russian Cup (1): 2010 Russian Super Cup ): 2008, 2011 UEFA Cup (1) : 2007–08 UEFA Super Cup (1) : 2008
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Original:  Petersburg Russian Premier League (3) : 2007, 2010, 2011–12 Russian Cup (1): 2010 Russian Super Cup (2 ): 2008, 2011 UEFA Cup (1) : 2007–08 UEFA Super Cup (1) : 2008
Revised:  Petersburg Russian Premier League (3) : 2007, 2010, 2011–12 Russian Cup (1): 2010 Russian Super Cup (2 ): 2008, 2011 UEFA Cup : 2007–08 UEFA Super Cup (1) : 2008
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Original:  His administration initially told the French Catholic Bishop Joseph Dupont that he had to leave, even though he had set up in Bemba territory before Codrington arrived on the scene, had opened up Bemba lands to the British, and had been accepted so completely he had been offered a Bemba chieftainship.
Revised:  His administration initially told the French Catholic bishop Joseph Dupont that he had to leave, even though he had set up in Bemba territory before Codrington arrived on the scene, had opened up Bemba lands to the British, and had been accepted so completely he had been offered a Bemba chieftainship.
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Original:  Robert Edward Codrington (6 January 1869 – 16 December 1908) was the colonial Administrator of the two territories ruled by the British South Africa Company (BSAC) which became present-day Zambia.
Revised: Sir Robert Edward Codrington (6 January 1869 – 16 December 1908) was the colonial Administrator of the two territories ruled by the British South Africa Company (BSAC) which became present-day Zambia.
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Original:  He was knighted as ' Sir Robert Codrington ' for his work.
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Original:  He was knighted as ' Sir Robert Codrington ' for his work.
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Original:  Although portrayed by some European writers as kind and just, he was paternalistic towards Africans and uncompromising in his view of the superiority of the British.
Revised:  Although portrayed by some writers as kind and just, he was paternalistic towards Africans and uncompromising in his view of the superiority of the British.
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Original:  He was Administrator of North-Eastern Rhodesia, based at Fort Jameson, now Chipata, from 11 July 1898 to 24 April 1907, and then of North-Western Rhodesia, based at Livingstone from February 1908 to his death in London on 16 December 1908 from heart disease at the age of only 39.
Revised:  He was Administrator of North-Eastern Rhodesia, based at Fort Jameson, now Chipata, from 11 July 1898 to 24 April 1907, and then of North-Western Rhodesia, based at Livingstone from February 1908 to his death in London on 16 December 1908 from heart disease at age 39.
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Original: 2011 deaths Category:20th-century Mormon missionaries Category:American general authorities (LDS Church) Category:American Mormon missionaries in Switzerland Category:American political consultants Category:Hinckley–Bitner family Category:Members of the Second Quorum of the Seventy (LDS Church) Category:Writers from Salt Lake City Category:Deaths from renal failure Category:Burials at Salt Lake City Cemetery Category:Utah Republicans Category:Pollsters Category:Latter Day Saints from Ut
Revised: 2011 deaths Category:20th-century Mormon missionaries Category:American general authorities (LDS Church) Category:American Mormon missionaries in Switzerland Category:American political consultants Category:Hinckley–Bitner family Category:Members of the Second Quorum of the Seventy (LDS Church) Category:Writers from Salt Lake City Category:Deaths from renal failure Category:Burials at Salt Lake City Cemetery Category:Utah Republicans Category:Pollsters Category:Latter Day Saints from Utah Category:Latter Day Saints from Californ
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Original: American general authorities (LDS Church) Category:American Mormon missionaries in Switzerland Category:American political consultants Category:Hinckley–Bitner family Category:Members of the Second Quorum of the Seventy (LDS Church) Category:Writers from Salt Lake City Category:Deaths from renal failure Category:Burials at Salt Lake City Cemetery Category:Utah Republicans Category:Pollsters Category:Latter Day Saints from Utah Category:Latter Day Saints from Californ
Revised: American general authorities (LDS Church) Category:American Mormon missionaries in Switzerland Category:American political consultants Category:Hinckley–Bitner family Category:Members of the Second Quorum of the Seventy (LDS Church) Category:Writers from Salt Lake City Category:Deaths from renal failure Category:Burials at Salt Lake City Cemetery Category:Utah Republicans Category:Pollsters Category:Latter Day Saints from Utah Category:Latter Day Saints from California Category:Latter Day Saints from Washington, D.
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