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Original:  This also caused her to lose both feet, some fingers, and her right ear
Revised:  She also lost her to lose both feet, some fingers, and her right ear
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Original: A car driven by an 80 year old man has hit Sophie Delezio, a five year old girl , at a pedestrian crossing at Frenchs Forest Road in Seaforth, in Sydney's north at 4pm AEST.
Revised: A car driven by an 80-year-old man has hit Sophie Delezio, a five year old girl , at a pedestrian crossing at Frenchs Forest Road in Seaforth, in Sydney's north at 4pm AEST.
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Original: A car driven by an 80 year old man has hit Sophie Delezio, a five year old girl , at a pedestrian crossing at Frenchs Forest Road in Seaforth, in Sydney's north at 4pm AEST.
Revised: A car driven by an 80 year old man has hit a five year old girl , at a pedestrian crossing at Frenchs Forest Road in Seaforth, in Sydney's north at 4pm AEST.
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Original: A car driven by an 80 year old man has hit Sophie Delezio, a five year old girl , at a pedestrian crossing at Frenchs Forest Road in Seaforth, in Sydney's north at 4pm AEST.
Revised: A car driven by an 80 year old man has hit Sophie Delezio, a five year old girl at a pedestrian crossing at Frenchs Forest Road in Seaforth, in Sydney's north at 4pm AEST.
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Original:  The 80 year old driver of the car that crashed into her has been arrested on negligent driving causing grievous bodily harm and failing to give way at a pedestrian crossing.
Revised:  The 80-year-old driver of the car that crashed into her has been arrested on negligent driving causing grievous bodily harm and failing to give way at a pedestrian crossing.
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Original:  Sophie Delezio was also involved in the accident involving a driver crashing into the Roundhouse Childcare Centre on December 15, 2003 causing her severe burns to 85\% of her body.
Revised:  Sophie was also involved in the accident involving a driver crashing into the Roundhouse Childcare Centre on December 15, 2003 causing her severe burns to 85\% of her body.
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Original:  Sophie Delezio was also involved in the accident involving a driver crashing into the Roundhouse Childcare Centre on December 15, 2003 causing her severe burns to 85\% of her body.
Revised:  Sophie Delezio was also involved in an accident involving a driver crashing into the Roundhouse Childcare Centre on December 15, 2003 causing her severe burns to 85\% of her body.
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Original:  A drug called NevoSeven is credited with stopping the bleeding around her lung.
Revised:  A drug called NovoSeven is credited with stopping the bleeding around her lung.
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Original:  She is in hospital and expected to fully recover.
Revised:  She is expected to fully recover.
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Original: Spanish coach Luis Aragonesannounced on Friday a preliminary squad för World Cup finals in Germany.
Revised: On Friday Luis Aragones, coach of the Spanish national football team, announced the preliminary squad for the World Cup finals in Germany.
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Original:  The 27-man squad includes 7 players from  Premier League and among them Chelsea left-back Asier Del Horno.
Revised:  The 27-man squad includes 7 players from the Premier League and among them Chelsea left-back Asier Del Horno.
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Original:  "All Del Horno has done this year is kick Barcelona's Lionel Messi in the Champions League," says Schuster, aiming the Champions League game in February between Chelsea and Barcelona  .
Revised:  "All Del Horno has done this year is kick Barcelona's Lionel Messi in the Champions League," says Schuster, aiming the Champions League game between Chelsea and Barcelona .
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Original:  Argentinian born Mariano Pernia got dual nationality and could play for Spain in the World Cup finals.
Revised:  Argentinian born w:Mariano Pernia has dual citizenship and could play for Spain in the World Cup finals.
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Original: On Friday  Luis Aragones, coach of the Spanish national football team, announced the preliminary squad for the World Cup finals in Germany.
Revised: On Friday , Luis Aragones, coach of the Spanish national football team, announced the preliminary squad for the World Cup finals in Germany.
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Original:  The 27-man squad includes 7 players from the Premier League and among them Chelsea left-back Asier Del Horno.
Revised:  The 27-man squad includes 7 players from the Premier League , among them Chelsea left-back Asier Del Horno.
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Original:  Argentinian born Mariano Pernia has dual citizenship  and could play for Spain in the World Cup finals.
Revised:  Pernia, who was born in Argentina, has dual citizenship and could play for Spain in the World Cup finals.
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Original:  Argentinian born Mariano Pernia has dual citizenship  and could play for Spain in the World Cup finals.
Revised:  Argentinian born Mariano Pernia has dual citizenship , and could play for Spain in the World Cup finals.
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Original:  Tamara D. Lawrence, a spokeswoman for the military said that  the crash was not the result of any attack from militants.
Revised:  Tamara D. Lawrence, a spokeswoman for the military said that the crash was the result of any attack from militants.
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Original: A  U.S. Army CH-47 lifts a Howitzer.
Revised: A similar U.S. Army CH-47 lifts a Howitzer.
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Original: Members of the crowd alledigedly shouted slogans such as "Victory for the Mehdi Army !" and "we are all soldiers of al-Sayed" in support of local militants lead by Shi'ite Muslim cleric Moqtada al-Sadr . As conflict was escalated, British and Shiite gunmen exchanged fire which resulted in the addition deaths of four Iraqis including two children.
Revised: Members of the crowd alledigedly shouted slogans such as "Victory for the Mehdi Army !" and "we are all soldiers of al-Sayed" in support of local militants lead by Shi'ite Muslim cleric Moqtada al-Sadr . As conflict was escalated, British and Shiite gunmen exchanged fire which resulted in the addition deaths of four Iraqis including two children.
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Original: Members of the crowd alledigedly shouted slogans such as "Victory for the Mehdi Army !" and "we are all soldiers of al-Sayed" in support of local militants lead by Shi'ite Muslim cleric Moqtada al-Sadr . As conflict was escalated, British and Shiite gunmen exchanged fire which resulted in the addition deaths of four Iraqis including two children.
Revised: Members of the crowd alledigedly shouted slogans such as "Victory for the Mehdi Army !" and "we are all soldiers of al-Sayed" in support of local militants lead by Shi'ite Muslim cleric Moqtada al-Sadr . As conflict was escalated, British and Shi'ite gunmen exchanged fire which resulted in the addition deaths of four Iraqis including two children.
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Original: Earlier, an AFP journalist sighted the downed British military helicopter reports they saw two of the crew members burnt after the impact which caused the helicopter to burst into flames.
Revised: Earlier, an AFP journalist sighted the downed British military helicopter and reported he saw two burnt crew members after the impact which caused the helicopter to burst into flames.
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Original:  On the arrival of British troops including two tanks and one land-rover at the scene the crowd  attacked the British forces with rocks, debris and petrol bombs.
Revised:  On the arrival of British troops including two tanks and one land-rover at the scene the crowd allegedly attacked the British forces with rocks, debris and petrol bombs.
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Original:  Kelly Goodall, said British soldiers who responded came “ under attack by a variety of weapons, including small arms fire, petrol bombs, as well as blast bombs and stone.
Revised:  Kelly Goodall, said British soldiers who responded came " under attack by a variety of weapons, including small arms fire, petrol bombs, as well as blast bombs and stone.
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Original:   British soldiers used foam to extinguish their vehicles, escaping un injured .
Revised:  " British soldiers used foam to extinguish their vehicles, escaping un injured .
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Original:   British soldiers used foam to extinguish their vehicles, escaping un injured .
Revised:  British soldiers used foam to extinguish their vehicles, escaping un-injured .
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Original:  Members of the crowd alledigedly shouted slogans such as "Victory for the Mehdi Army!" and "we are all soldiers of al-Sayed" in support of local militants lead by Shi'ite Muslim cleric Moqtada al-Sadr.
Revised:  Members of the crowd allegedly shouted slogans such as "Victory for the Mehdi Army!" and "we are all soldiers of al-Sayed" in support of local militants lead by Shi'ite Muslim cleric Moqtada al-Sadr.
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Original:  Contradictory to reports from the British defence department, The journalist said that british soldiers raised their rifles and shot one man dead , also later shooting the driver of a car in a local street dead.
Revised:  Contrary to reports from the British defence department, The journalist said that british soldiers raised their rifles and shot one man dead , also later shooting the driver of a car in a local street dead.
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Original:  Contradictory to reports from the British defence department, The journalist said that british soldiers raised their rifles and shot one man dead , also later shooting the driver of a car in a local street dead.
Revised:  Contradictory to reports from the British defence department, the journalist said that british soldiers raised their rifles and shot one man dead , also later shooting the driver of a car in a local street dead.
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Original:  Contradictory to reports from the British defence department, The journalist said that british soldiers raised their rifles and shot one man dead , also later shooting the driver of a car in a local street dead.
Revised:  Contradictory to reports from the British defence department, The journalist said that british soldiers raised their rifles and shot one man dead and also later shot the driver of a car in a local street dead.
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Original:  An Iraqi policeman in Basra said the helicopter was downed by a rocket  said four Iraqi civilians, including two children, were killed and another 19 wounded in the fighting.
Revised:  An Iraqi policeman in Basra said the helicopter was downed by a rocket and said four Iraqi civilians, including two children, were killed and another 19 wounded in the fighting.
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Original:  Colonel Kareem al-Zaidi, " A multinational forces helicopter was hit by a rocket and went down on houses in central Basra".
Revised:  Colonel Kareem al-Zaidi, " a multinational forces helicopter was hit by a rocket and went down on houses in central Basra".
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Original:  On the arrival of British troops  including two tanks and one land-rover at the scene the crowd allegedly attacked the British forces with rocks, debris and petrol bombs.
Revised:  On the arrival of British troops at the scene, including two tanks and one land-rover at the scene the crowd allegedly attacked the British forces with rocks, debris and petrol bombs.
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Original:  On the arrival of British troops  including two tanks and one land-rover at the scene the crowd allegedly attacked the British forces with rocks, debris and petrol bombs.
Revised:  On the arrival of British troops including two tanks and one land-rover , the crowd allegedly attacked the British forces with rocks, debris and petrol bombs.
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Original:  Members of the crowd allegedly shouted slogans such as " Victory for the Mehdi Army!" and "we are all soldiers of al-Sayed" in support of local militants lead by Shi'ite Muslim cleric Moqtada al-Sadr.
Revised:  Members of the crowd allegedly shouted slogans such as " victory for the Mehdi Army!" and "we are all soldiers of al-Sayed" in support of local militants lead by Shi'ite Muslim cleric Moqtada al-Sadr.
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Original:  Contrary to reports from the British defence department, the journalist said that british soldiers raised their rifles and shot one man dead and also later shot the driver of a car in a local street dead.
Revised:  Contrary to reports from the British defence department, the journalist said that British soldiers raised their rifles and shot one man dead and also later shot the driver of a car in a local street dead.
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Original:  A British military helicopter crashed in Basra on Saturday killing four crew members.
Revised: BEFORE READING THIS.. TAKE INTO MIND THE WORLD WOULD BE A BETTER PLACE IF WE SHOVED ALL THE DIRTIES BACK INTO THERE OWN COUNTRY!!'''''' A British military helicopter crashed in Basra on Saturday killing four crew members.
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Original:  Other reporters witnessed Carleton going red in the face, walking a short distance then collapsing  .  Carleton has a history of heart problems included previous heart attacks, a heart bypass and prostate cancer .
Revised:  Other reporters witnessed Carleton going red in the face, walking a short distance then collapsing to the ground . Carleton has a history of heart problems included previous heart attacks, a heart bypass and prostate cancer .
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Original:  Other reporters witnessed Carleton going red in the face, walking a short distance then collapsing  .  Carleton has a history of heart problems included previous heart attacks, a heart bypass and prostate cancer .
Revised:  Other reporters witnessed Carleton going red in the face, walking a short distance then collapsing . Carleton has a history of heart problems included previous heart attacks, a heart bypass and prostate cancer 
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Original: Ambulance officers worked to revive Careleton for over 25 minutes, before he was rushed to hospital.
Revised: Ambulance officers worked to revive Carleton for over 25 minutes, before he was rushed to hospital.
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Original: Carleton has  a history of heart problems which has included a heart attack in 2003 and a heart bypass operation in 1998.
Revised: Carleton has had a history of heart problems which has included a heart attack in 2003 and a heart bypass operation in 1998.
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Original: Carleton has had a history of heart problems which has included a heart attack in 2003 and a heart bypass operation in 1998.
Revised: Carleton has had a history of heart problems which has included a heart attack in 2003 and a bypass operation in 1998.
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Original: During a live Press Interview broadcast at the Beaconsfield Gold Mine on the Seven and Nine Networks Veteran 60-Minutes News Reporter Richard Carleton suffered a suspected heart attack.
Revised: During a live press interview broadcast at the Beaconsfield Gold Mine on the Seven and Nine Networks Veteran 60-Minutes News Reporter Richard Carleton suffered a suspected heart attack.
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Original: During a live Press Interview broadcast at the Beaconsfield Gold Mine on the Seven and Nine Networks Veteran 60-Minutes News Reporter Richard Carleton suffered a suspected heart attack.
Revised: During a live Press Interview broadcast at the Beaconsfield Gold Mine on the Seven and Nine Networks Veteran 60 Minutes news reporter Richard Carleton suffered a suspected heart attack.
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Original:  Upon arrival, he was pronounced dead  .
Revised:  He was pronounced dead .
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Original: Carleton has had a history of heart problems which has included a heart attack in 2003 and a bypass operation in 1998.
Revised: Carleton had a history of heart problems which has included a heart attack in 2003 and a bypass operation in 1998.
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Original: King Gyanendra of NepalKing Gyanendra of Nepal has today announced a new 10-member cabinet, after yesterday sacking the democratically elected coalition government.
Revised: King Gyanendra of NepalKing Gyanendra of Nepal has today announced a new 10-member cabinet, after yesterday sacking the coalition government.
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Original: Gyanendra named Rames Nath Pandey as foreign minister, Dan Bahadur Shahi as Home Minister, as well as Radha Krishna Mainali, a member of the communist party, as minsiter for sports and education.
Revised: Gyanendra named Rames Nath Pandey as foreign minister, Dan Bahadur Shahi as Home Minister, as well as Radha Krishna Mainali, a member of the communist party, as minister for sports and education.
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Original: French Poster promoting the Nepali maoists Prachanda, denounced King Gyanendra as a "national betrayer" and told Nepalis to "shut down Nepal" in a three day general strike from Wednesday to Friday, however witnesses in Kathmandu said life was going on as normal, and there are no obvious signs of additional security.
Revised:  Prachanda, denounced King Gyanendra as a "national betrayer" and told Nepalis to "shut down Nepal" in a three day general strike from Wednesday to Friday, however witnesses in Kathmandu said life was going on as normal, and there are no obvious signs of additional security.
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Original: King Gyanendra of NepalKing Gyanendra of Nepal has today announced a new 10-member cabinet, after yesterday sacking the coalition government.
Revised: King Gyanendra of Nepal has today announced a new 10-member cabinet, after yesterday sacking the coalition government.
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Original:  While details for a UN peacekeeping force are finalised, the US diplomat said the US had asked Rwanda to send in some 1,200 troops to supplement the AU forces . Soure
Revised:  While details for a UN peacekeeping force are finalised, the US diplomat said the US had asked Rwanda to send in some 1,200 troops to supplement the AU forces Soure
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Original:  While details for a UN peacekeeping force are finalised, the US diplomat said the US had asked Rwanda to send in some 1,200 troops to supplement the AU forces . Soure
Revised:  While details for a UN peacekeeping force are finalised, the US diplomat said the US had asked Rwanda to send in some 1,200 troops to supplement the AU forces . 
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Original:  While details for a UN peacekeeping force are finalised, the US diplomat said the US had asked Rwanda to send in some 1,200 troops to supplement the AU forces  
Revised:  While details for a UN peacekeeping force are finalised, the US diplomat said the US had asked Rwanda to send in some 1,200 troops to supplement the AU forces . 
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Original:  While details for a UN peacekeeping force are finalised, the US diplomat said the US had asked Rwanda to send in some 1,200 troops to supplement the AU forces  
Revised:  While details for a UN peacekeeping force are finalised, the US diplomat said the US had asked Rwanda to send in some 1,200 troops to supplement the AU forces Related New
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Original: Sudan Government has expressed that  Darfur Peace Acccord with main rebel group, Sudan Liberation Army, led by Minni Menawi, can overturn the previous rejection of UN Peacekeepers.
Revised: The Government of Sudan has expressed that Darfur Peace Acccord with main rebel group, Sudan Liberation Army, led by Minni Menawi, can overturn the previous rejection of UN Peacekeepers.
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Original: Sudan Government has expressed that  Darfur Peace Acccord with main rebel group, Sudan Liberation Army, led by Minni Menawi, can overturn the previous rejection of UN Peacekeepers.
Revised: Sudan Government has expressed that the Darfur Peace Acccord with main rebel group, Sudan Liberation Army, led by Minni Menawi, can overturn the previous rejection of UN Peacekeepers.
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Original:  In New York, John Bolton, the US ambassador, on Saturday welcomed Khartoum's new willingness to accept a UN peacekeeping force to take over from AU soldiers in  Darfur region.
Revised:  In New York, John Bolton, the US ambassador, on Saturday welcomed Khartoum's new willingness to accept a UN peacekeeping force to take over from AU soldiers in the Darfur region.
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Original: In New York, John  Bolton, the US ambassador, on Saturday welcomed Khartoum's new willingness to accept a UN peacekeeping force to take over from AU soldiers in the Darfur region.
Revised: In New York, John R. Bolton, the US ambassador, on Saturday welcomed Khartoum's new willingness to accept a UN peacekeeping force to take over from AU soldiers in the Darfur region.
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Original:  There are 187 signatures on the teaty
Revised:  There are 187 signatures on the treaty
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Original:    "If everybody - all stakeholders and key players - were around the table, I think it would be possible to work out a package that would satisfy the concerns of everybody.
Revised:  Annan stated, "If everybody - all stakeholders and key players - were around the table, I think it would be possible to work out a package that would satisfy the concerns of everybody.
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Original:  Should they (Iran) be offered a diplomatic package allowing them to pursue nuclear energy for peaceful ends, and they resist that, how do they explain it to the world?" , said Annan.
Revised:  Should they (Iran) be offered a diplomatic package allowing them to pursue nuclear energy for peaceful ends, and they resist that, how do they explain it to the world?" 
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Original:  However; Asefi said that Iran will not talk with the United States "one-on-one" about its nuclear program  .
Revised:  Asefi said that Iran will not talk with the United States "one-on-one" about its nuclear program .
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Original:  However; Asefi said that Iran will not talk with the United States "one-on-one" about its nuclear program  .
Revised:  However; Asefi said that Iran will not talk with the United States about its nuclear program .
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Original:  There are 187 signatures on the treaty  
Revised:  There are 187 signatures on the treaty . 
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Original: The Pharmaceutical Benefits Scheme (PBS)   is a programme by the Federal Government of Australia that provides heavily subsidised prescription drugs to all citizens and residents of that country .
Revised: The Pharmaceutical Benefits Scheme (PBS) The Pharmaceutical Benefits Scheme is a programme by the Federal Government of Australia that provides heavily subsidised prescription drugs to all citizens and residents of that country .
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Original: The Pharmaceutical Benefits Scheme (PBS)   is a programme by the Federal Government of Australia that provides heavily subsidised prescription drugs to all citizens and residents of that country .
Revised: The Pharmaceutical Benefits Scheme (PBS) is a programme that provides heavily subsidised prescription drugs to all citizens and residents of that country .
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Original: The Pharmaceutical Benefits Scheme (PBS)   is a programme by the Federal Government of Australia that provides heavily subsidised prescription drugs to all citizens and residents of that country .
Revised: The Pharmaceutical Benefits Scheme (PBS) is a programme by the Federal Government of Australia that provides heavily subsidised prescription drugs to all citizens and residents of Australia .
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Original:  Examples of medicines that are not included are hayfever relief medications and cough medicines.
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Original: The elephant, made mostly from wood, is operated by over ten puppeteers, who move the elephant using a complex arrangement of hydrolics and motors.
Revised: The elephant, made mostly from wood, is operated by over ten puppeteers, who move the elephant using a complex arrangement of hydraulics and motors.
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Original:  The spectacle will end on Sunday with a grand finale . Seen the elephant?
Revised:  The spectacle will end on Sunday with a grand finale Seen the elephant?
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