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Original:  it was reported by TIME magazine that they "swaggered riotously" in the aftermath In June 1928 in Beijing, Bai Chongxi announced that the forces of the Kuomintang would seize control of Manchuria and the enemies of the Kuomintang would "scatter like dead leaves before the rising wind".
Revised:  it was reported by Time magazine that they "swaggered riotously" in the aftermath In June 1928 in Beijing, Bai Chongxi announced that the forces of the Kuomintang would seize control of Manchuria and the enemies of the Kuomintang would "scatter like dead leaves before the rising wind".
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Original:  Prominent Muslims like Gen.
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Original:  Bai was the first defense minister of the Republic of China from 1946-48.
Revised:  Bai was the first defense minister of the Republic of China from 1946 to 1948.
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Original:  From 1930-36 Bai was instrumental in the Reconstruction of Guangxi, which became a "model" province with a progressive administration.
Revised:  From 1930 to 1936, Bai was instrumental in the Reconstruction of Guangxi, which became a "model" province with a progressive administration.
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Original:  Between 1939-42 the Japanese attacked Changsha three times and were repelled each time.
Revised:  Between 1939 and 1942, the Japanese attacked Changsha three times and were repelled each time.
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Original:  He sent a telegram requesting that Chiang Kai-shek step down as President , amid a storm of requests by other Kuomintang military and political figures for Chiang to step down and allow a peace deal with the Communists.
Revised:  He sent a telegram requesting that Chiang Kai-shek step down as president , amid a storm of requests by other Kuomintang military and political figures for Chiang to step down and allow a peace deal with the Communists.
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Original:  He reorganized the party from 1950-1952.
Revised:  He reorganized the party from 1950 to 1952.
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Original: Issue 1, as well as refering to the first edition of a publication such as magazine , comic, or e-zine, is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
Revised: Issue 1, as well as refering to the first edition of a publication such as magazine , comic, or e-zine, is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
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Original:  The sometimes "rough" or "unfinished" feel of a first issue, that results from the "bedding in" of the publication process and half-formed ideas, is appreciated by readers more than subsequent issues Much of the publication's content is explained from a clean slate - in comics, many strips contains a telling of the character's origin story First issues of publications are often sought after by collectors due to their perceived increased originality.
Revised:  The sometimes "rough" or "unfinished" feel of a first issue, that results from the "bedding in" of the publication process and half-formed ideas, is appreciated by readers more than subsequent issues Much of the publication's content is explained from a clean slate - in comics, many strips contains a telling of the character's origin story First issues of publications often have an increased market value, due to their perceived increased originality.
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Original: Issue 1,  as well as referring to the first edition of a publication such as magazine, comic, or e-zine, is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
Revised: Issue 1, is an expression, which, as well as referring to the first edition of a publication such as magazine, comic, or e-zine, is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
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Original:  The sometimes "rough" or "unfinished" feel of a first issue, that results from the "bedding in" of the publication process and half-formed ideas, is appreciated by readers more than subsequent issues Much of the publication's content is explained from a clean slate - in comics, many strips contains a telling of the character's origin story  First issues of publications often have an increased market value, due to their perceived increased originality.
Revised:  The sometimes "rough" or "unfinished" feel of a first issue, that results from the "bedding in" of the publication process and half-formed ideas, is appreciated by readers more than are subsequent issues. Much of the publication's content is explained from a clean slate - in comics, many strips contains a telling of the character's origin story First issues of publications often have an increased market value, due to their perceived increased originality.
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Original:  The sometimes "rough" or "unfinished" feel of a first issue, that results from the "bedding in" of the publication process and half-formed ideas, is appreciated by readers more than subsequent issues Much of the publication's content is explained from a clean slate - in comics, many strips contains a telling of the character's origin story  First issues of publications often have an increased market value, due to their perceived increased originality.
Revised:  The sometimes "rough" or "unfinished" feel of a first issue, that results from the "bedding in" of the publication process and half-formed ideas, is appreciated by readers more than subsequent issues Much of the publication's content is explained from a clean slate - in comics, many strips contains a telling of the character's origin story . First issues of publications often have an increased market value, due to their perceived increased originality.
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Original:  See also : First edition Television pil
Revised:  See also First edition Television pil
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Original: Issue 1 , is an expression , which , as well as referring to the first edition of a publication such as  magazine, comic, or e-zine,  is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
Revised: Issue 1 is an expression , which , as well as referring to the first edition of a publication such as magazine, comic, or e-zine, is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
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Original: Issue 1 , is an expression , which , as well as referring to the first edition of a publication such as  magazine, comic, or e-zine,  is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
Revised: Issue 1 , is an expression which refers to the first edition of a publication such as magazine, comic, or e-zine, is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
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Original: Issue 1 , is an expression , which , as well as referring to the first edition of a publication such as  magazine, comic, or e-zine,  is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
Revised: Issue 1 , is an expression , which , as well as referring to the first edition of a publication such as a magazine, comic, or e-zine, is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
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Original: Issue 1 , is an expression , which , as well as referring to the first edition of a publication such as  magazine, comic, or e-zine,  is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
Revised: Issue 1 , is an expression , which , as well as referring to the first edition of a publication such as magazine, comic, or e-zine, and is also used to denote the initial direction or output of creativity.
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Original:  Much of the publication's content is explained from a clean slate - in comics, many strips contains a telling of the character's origin story.
Revised:  Much of the publication's content is explained from a clean slate - in comics, many strips contain a telling of the character's origin story.
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Original: The Teatr Skazki The Saint Petersburg State Puppet Theatre of Fairy Tales (Санкт-Петербургский государственный кукольный театр сказки) is a Russian puppet theatre .
Revised: The Teatr Skazki The Saint Petersburg State Puppet Theatre of Fairy Tales (Санкт-Петербургский государственный кукольный театр сказки) is an all-ages, Russian puppet theatre .
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Original:  It  opened on 31 December 1944.
Revised:  It History The theater opened on 31 December 1944.
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Original:  Официальный сайт Санкт-Петербургского государственного Театра сказки.
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Original: The Teatr Skazki The Saint Petersburg State Puppet Theatre of Fairy Tales (Санкт-Петербургский государственный кукольный театр сказки) is an all-ages, Russian puppet theatre focused on imaginative, morallic performances based around personifying the world through quixotical fantasy and peaceful conditions.
Revised: The Saint Petersburg State Puppet Theatre of Fairy Tales (Санкт-Петербургский государственный кукольный театр сказки) is an all-ages, Russian puppet theatre focused on imaginative, morallic performances based around personifying the world through quixotical fantasy and peaceful conditions.
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Original: The Saint Petersburg State Puppet Theatre of Fairy Tales also known as the "Fairy Tale Theater" is an all-ages, Russian puppet theatre focused on imaginative, morallic performances based around personifying the world through quixotical fantasy and peaceful conditions.
Revised: The Saint Petersburg State Puppet Theatre of Fairy Tales also known as the "Fairy Tale Theater" is an all-ages, Russian puppet theatre focused on imaginative, morallic performances based around personifying the world through quixotic fantasy and peaceful conditions.
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Original:  To do this, they formed the theater, and after 10+ years they gained the official status as a "state theater" and were given an secure rehearsal space.
Revised:  To do this, they formed the theater, and after 10+ years they gained the official status as a "state theater" and were given a secure rehearsal space.
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Original:  As a speaker, he has been a part of numerous self organized events as well as of those organized by URL and has also been cited among one of the male speakers who have boycotted all male speaker panels as a way to protest against lack of female representation.
Revised:  As a speaker, he has been a part of numerous self organised events as well as of those organized by URL and has also been cited among one of the male speakers who have boycotted all male speaker panels as a way to protest against lack of female representation.
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Original:  As a speaker, he has been a part of numerous self organized events as well as of those organized by URL and has also been cited among one of the male speakers who have boycotted all male speaker panels as a way to protest against lack of female representation.
Revised:  As a speaker, he has been a part of numerous self organized events as well as of those organised by URL and has also been cited among one of the male speakers who have boycotted all male speaker panels as a way to protest against lack of female representation.
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Original:  Jason A. Fox is the bestselling author of The Game Changer.
Revised:  Jason A. Fox is the best-selling author of The Game Changer.
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Original: A number of national government agencies have performed collaborative or independent research to test the validity of the ecological footprint accounting method and its results.
Revised: A number of national government agencies have performed collaborative or independent research to test the reliability of the ecological footprint accounting method and its results.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 500px|Ecological Footprint per person and HDI of countries by world regions (2014) and its natural resource consumption According to the 2018 edition of the National footprint accounts, humanity's total ecological footprint has exhibited an increasing trend since 1961, growing an average of 2.1\% per year (SD = 1.9).
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% According to the 2018 edition of the National footprint accounts, humanity's total ecological footprint has exhibited an increasing trend since 1961, growing an average of 2.1\% per year (SD = 1.9).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 500px|Ecological Footprint per person and HDI of countries by world regions (2014) and its natural resource consumption According to the 2018 edition of the National footprint accounts, humanity's total ecological footprint has exhibited an increasing trend since 1961, growing an average of 2.1\% per year (SD = 1.9).
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 500px|Ecological Footprint per person and HDI of countries by world regions (2014) and its natural resource consumption = 1.9).
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Original: File:World map of countries by ecological footprint (2007).svg|300px|World map of countries by their raw ecological footprint, relative to the world average biocapacity (2007) . ]] [[File:World map of countries by ecological deficit (2013).svg|300px|National ecological surplus or deficit, measured as a country's biocapacity per person (in global hectares) minus its ecological footprint per person (also in global hectares).
Revised: File:World map of countries by ecological footprint (2007).svg|300px|World map of countries by their raw ecological footprint, relative to the world average biocapacity (2007) ]] [[File:World map of countries by ecological deficit (2013).svg|300px|National ecological surplus or deficit, measured as a country's biocapacity per person (in global hectares) minus its ecological footprint per person (also in global hectares).
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Original:  Lin et al. . (2018) finds that the trends for countries and the world have stayed consistent despite data updates.
Revised:  Lin et al. (2018) finds that the trends for countries and the world have stayed consistent despite data updates.
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Original:  The ecological footprint accounting method at the national level is described on the website of Global Footprint Network or in greater detail in academic papers, including Borucke et al. . Footprint measurements Ecological footprints in 2018.
Revised:  The ecological footprint accounting method at the national level is described on the website of Global Footprint Network or in greater detail in academic papers, including Borucke et al. Footprint measurements Ecological footprints in 2018.
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Original:  The ecological footprint accounting method at the national level is described on the website of Global Footprint Network or in greater detail in academic papers, including Borucke et al. . Footprint measurements Ecological footprints in 2018.
Revised:  The ecological footprint accounting method at the national level is described on the website of Global Footprint Network or in greater detail in academic papers, including Borucke et al. . Footprint measurements Ecological footprints in 2018
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Original:  According to Wackernagel and his organisation, the Earth has been in "overshoot", where humanity is using more resources and generating waste at a pace that the ecosystem can't renew, since the 1970s.
Revised:  According to Wackernagel and his organisation, the Earth has been in "overshoot", where humanity is using more resources and generating waste at a pace that the ecosystem cannot renew, since the 1970s.
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Original:  Footprint by country [[File:Human welfare and ecological footprint sustainability.jpg|300x300px|Ecological footprint for different nations compared to their Human Development Index . ]] Blomqvist et al. . published a critical paper in 2013.
Revised:  Footprint by country [[File:Human welfare and ecological footprint sustainability.jpg|300x300px|Ecological footprint for different nations compared to their Human Development Index ]] Blomqvist et al. . published a critical paper in 2013.
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Original:  Footprint by country [[File:Human welfare and ecological footprint sustainability.jpg|300x300px|Ecological footprint for different nations compared to their Human Development Index . ]] Blomqvist et al. . published a critical paper in 2013.
Revised:  Footprint by country [[File:Human welfare and ecological footprint sustainability.jpg|300x300px|Ecological footprint for different nations compared to their Human Development Index . ]] Blomqvist et al. published a critical paper in 2013.
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Original:  It led to a reply from Rees and Wackernagel (2013), and a rejoinder by Blomqvist et al. . (2013).
Revised:  It led to a reply from Rees and Wackernagel (2013), and a rejoinder by Blomqvist et al. (2013).
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Original:  Examples of such confusions include Grazi et al. . (2007) who performed a systematic comparison of the ecological footprint method with spatial welfare analysis that includes environmental externalities, agglomeration effects and trade advantages.
Revised:  Examples of such confusions include Grazi et al. (2007) who performed a systematic comparison of the ecological footprint method with spatial welfare analysis that includes environmental externalities, agglomeration effects and trade advantages.
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Original:  But in reality, ecological footprints just document the resource dependence of cities - like a fuel gauge documents a car's fuel availability.
Revised:  But in reality, ecological footprints just document the resource dependence of cities — like a fuel gauge documents a car's fuel availability.
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Original: The model is a means of comparing consumption and lifestyles, and checking this against biocapacity.
Revised: The model comparing consumption and lifestyles, and checking this against biocapacity.
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Original:  <ref name="Adams2"> The sustainability goal is to raise the global standard of living without increasing the use of resources beyond globally sustainable levels;
Revised:  The sustainability goal is to raise the global standard of living without increasing the use of resources beyond globally sustainable levels;
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Original: Criticism of Ecological Urbanism Ecological urbanism has been criticized as an idea that is loosely defined from a set of flashy projects.
Revised: Criticism of ecological urbanism Ecological urbanism has been criticized as an idea that is loosely defined from a set of flashy projects.
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Original:  What means do we have as designers to address this challenging URL
Revised:  What means do we have as designers to address this challenging reality?
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Original:  The University of Washington’s urban initiative included a seminar on Now Urbanism and talks "on Ecological Urbanism, Ecological Design for Healthy Cities, Networked Urbanism, and America’s War on Immigrants .”
Revised:  The University of Washington’s urban initiative included a seminar on Now Urbanism and talks "on Ecological Urbanism, Ecological Design for Healthy Cities, Networked Urbanism, and America’s War on Immigrants ".
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Original:  Jason King sees it as an inadequately explained addition to a list of 61 other 'Fill-in-the-blank URL Tom Turner welcomes landscape and ecological urbanism as 'the most significant contributions to landscape design theory since the landscape architecture profession was launched in the mid-nineteenth century' but is 'unpersuaded by the change of name' URL
Revised:  Jason King sees it as an inadequately explained addition to a list of 61 other 'Fill-in-the-blank URL Tom Turner welcomes landscape and ecological urbanism as 'the most significant contributions to landscape design theory since the landscape architecture profession was launched in the mid-nineteenth century' but is 'unpersuaded by the change of URL
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Original:  "Dawnsong " was installed as part of the Center's ARTSPARK initiative.
Revised:  Dawnsong was installed as part of the Center's ARTSPARK initiative.
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Original:  "Dawnsong " is a kinetic sculpture that serves as an interactive bike rack.
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Original:  According to Partington: "In "Dawnsong, " I am taking the multioccupancy home and through a series of gears and a hand-crank allowing the viewer to transform it into a single, more suburban home.
Revised:  According to Partington: "In Dawnsong, I am taking the multioccupancy home and through a series of gears and a hand-crank allowing the viewer to transform it into a single, more suburban home.
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Original:  History Today  (1975) 25#1 pp 31–39.
Revised:  History Today '' (1975) 25#1 pp 31–39.
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Original: Map of Tonga , showing its relation to neighbouring islands and groups The history of Tonga is recorded since the century after 900 BC, when seafarers associated with the Lapita diaspora first settled the islands which now make up the Kingdom of Tonga.
Revised: Tonga and neighbouring islands and groups The history of Tonga is recorded since the century after 900 BC, when seafarers associated with the Lapita diaspora first settled the islands which now make up the Kingdom of Tonga.
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Original: Map of Tonga , showing its relation to neighbouring islands and groups The history of Tonga is recorded since the century after 900 BC, when seafarers associated with the Lapita diaspora first settled the islands which now make up the Kingdom of Tonga.
Revised: Map of Tonga , showing its relation to neighbouring islands and groups The history of Tonga is recorded since the ninth century BC, when seafarers associated with the Lapita diaspora first settled the islands which now make up the Kingdom of Tonga.
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Original:  His full royal style was Kambawsarahta Thiri Pawaramahawuntha Thudamaraza.
Revised:  His full royal title was Kambawsarahta Thiri Pawaramahawuntha Thudamaraza.
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Original: President Sap Shwe Thaik became the president of the Union of Burma on 4 January 1948 at its independence, served as the head of state until 16 March 1952.
Revised: President Sao Shwe Thaik became the president of the Union of Burma on 4 January 1948 at its independence, served as the head of state until 16 March 1952.
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Original:  , ; 16 October 1895 – 21 November 1962) was the first president of the Union of Burma and the last Saopha of Yawnghwe.
Revised:  , ; 16 October 1895 – 21 November 1962) was the first president of Burma and the last Saopha of Yawnghwe.
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Original:  One therapy , by a Sicilian woman, he claims to have personally witnessed  , and he added another remedy on the same topic (mouth odor) which he himself endorses.
Revised:  One therapy that he claims to have personally witnessed , and he added another remedy on the same topic (mouth odor) which he himself endorses.
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Original: The condition is believed to be due to blood flowing back into pelvic veins as a result of faulty valves in the veins, this hypothesis is not certain.
Revised: Well the condition is believed to be due to blood flowing back into pelvic veins as a result of faulty valves in the veins, this hypothesis is not certain.
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Original: Well the condition is believed to be due to blood flowing back into pelvic veins as a result of faulty valves in the veins, this hypothesis is not certain.
Revised: While the condition is believed to be due to blood flowing back into pelvic veins as a result of faulty valves in the veins, this hypothesis is not certain.
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Original:  Well pelvic venous insufficiency was identified in the 1850s it was only linked with pelvic pain in the 1940s.
Revised:  While pelvic venous insufficiency was identified in the 1850s it was only linked with pelvic pain in the 1940s.
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