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Original:  The first round of the tournament, which is in Europe for the first time since 1998, will tip off in Istanbul, Ankara, İzmir andKayseri
Revised:  The first round of the tournament, which is in Europe for the first time since 1998, will tip off in Istanbul, , and
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Original: On July 31, the South Pacific Games Council met to decide on the matter,  announced to the public by Michael White, NMI chef de mission to the 2005 Palau South Pacific Mini Games.
Revised: On July 31, the South Pacific Games Council met to decide on the matter, with the meeting announced to the public by Michael White, NMI chef de mission to the 2005 Palau South Pacific Mini Games.
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Original:  Any country that send athletes to participate in the SPG is eligible to host the competition.
Revised:  Any country that sends athletes to participate in the SPG is eligible to host the competition.
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Original:  The New Caledonia win is the culimination of a six-year bid process , that all interested countries must follow.
Revised:  The New Caledonia win is the culimination of a six-year bid process that all interested countries must follow.
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Original:  White commented  "The charter lays out the time requirements . you have to submit a bid and the charter prescribes what elements have to be covered in your bid proposals.
Revised:  White commented , "The charter lays out the time requirements . you have to submit a bid and the charter prescribes what elements have to be covered in your bid proposals.
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Original:  White commented  "The charter lays out the time requirements . you have to submit a bid and the charter prescribes what elements have to be covered in your bid proposals.
Revised:  White commented "The charter lays out the time requirements you have to submit a bid and the charter prescribes what elements have to be covered in your bid proposals.
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Original:  Officials from Yap, the original host of the event, say that they won't be ready to host the event due to the damages of a recent typhoon.
Revised:  Officials from Yap, the original host of the event, say that they won't be ready to host the event due to damage from a recent typhoon.
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Original:  Another troop was also killed while fighting in the sout 
Revised:  Another troop was also killed while fighting in the south. 
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Original:  A military spokesman latter added that all of the soliders were American national 
Revised:  A military spokesman latter added that all of the soliders were American nationals. 
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Original: Six American soliders have been killed in seperate battles in eastern and southern Afghanistan.
Revised: Six American soliders have been killed in separate battles in eastern and southern Afghanistan.
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Original:  They said the troops died on the 28th and 29th . Three of the soliders died while fighting insurgents in the eastern part of the country on the 28th . On the same day two more troops were killed by a improvised bomb.
Revised:  They said the troops died on the 28th and 29th . Three of the soldiers died while fighting insurgents in the eastern part of the country on the 28th . On the same day two more troops were killed by a improvised bomb.
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Original:  In NATO's statment they did not release the nationalites of the soliders . A military spokesman latter added that all of the soliders were American nationals.
Revised:  NATO's statment they did not release the nationalites of the soliders . A military spokesman latter added that all of the soliders were American nationals.
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Original:  In NATO's statment they did not release the nationalites of the soliders . A military spokesman latter added that all of the soliders were American nationals.
Revised:  In NATO's statement did not disclose the nationalities of the soldiers . A military spokesman latter added that all of the soliders were American nationals.
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Original:  In NATO's statment they did not release the nationalites of the soliders . A military spokesman latter added that all of the soliders were American nationals.
Revised:  In NATO's statment they did not release the nationalites of the soliders . A military spokesman later added that all of the soliders were American nationals.
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Original:  In NATO's statment they did not release the nationalites of the soliders . A military spokesman latter added that all of the soliders were American nationals.
Revised:  In NATO's statment they did not release the nationalites of the soliders . A military spokesman latter added that all of the soldiers were U.S. nationals.
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Original:  With the soliders deaths the total of number of foreign troops killed in Afghanistan this year has hit 471.
Revised:  With the soldiers deaths the total of number of foreign troops killed in Afghanistan this year has hit 471.
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Original:  On the same day two more troops were killed by a improvised bomb.
Revised:  On the same day two more troops were killed by an improvised bomb.
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Original:  They said the troops died on the Saturday and Sunday.
Revised:  They said the troops died on Saturday and Sunday.
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Original: Six United States soldiers have been killed in separate battles in eastern and southern Afghanistan.
Revised: Six United States soldiers have been killed in separate incidents in eastern and southern Afghanistan.
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Original: The United Nations Security Council vowed to take all steps necessary, including the implementation of individual sanctions, in order to ensure  the resolutions of the Security Council were respected by both sides of the troubled Ivoiran peace process.
Revised: Yesterday, the United Nations Security Council vowed to take all steps necessary, including the implementation of individual sanctions, in order to ensure the resolutions of the Security Council were respected by both sides of the troubled Ivoiran peace process.
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Original: The United Nations Security Council vowed to take all steps necessary, including the implementation of individual sanctions, in order to ensure  the resolutions of the Security Council were respected by both sides of the troubled Ivoiran peace process.
Revised: The United Nations Security Council said it would take all steps necessary, including the implementation of individual sanctions, in order to ensure the resolutions of the Security Council were respected by both sides of the troubled Ivoiran peace process.
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Original: The United Nations Security Council vowed to take all steps necessary, including the implementation of individual sanctions, in order to ensure  the resolutions of the Security Council were respected by both sides of the troubled Ivoiran peace process.
Revised: The United Nations Security Council vowed to take all steps necessary, including the implementation of individual sanctions, in order to ensure that the resolutions of the Security Council were respected by both sides of the troubled Ivoiran peace process.
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Original: The United Nations Security Council vowed to take all steps necessary, including the implementation of individual sanctions, in order to ensure  the resolutions of the Security Council were respected by both sides of the troubled Ivoiran peace process.
Revised: The United Nations Security Council vowed to take all steps necessary, including the implementation of individual sanctions, in order to ensure the resolutions of the Security Council were adhered to by both sides of the troubled Ivoiran peace process.
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Original:  The remarks followed a closed-door briefing to the Security Council by representatives from the UN Mission in Cote d’Ivoire and  South African mediators.
Revised:  The remarks followed a briefing to the Security Council by representatives from the UN Mission in Cote d’Ivoire and South African mediators.
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Original:  South Africa denied on Wednesday that it was concluding its mediation in the Cote d'Ivoire crisis as it warned the UN Security Council to take care that any sanctions action did not negatively affect the peace process.
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Original:  "The South African Mediation stated that it will continue its efforts ... to ensure the holding of free, fair and transparent elections in Cote d' Ivoire as scheduled, which is the only solution to the crisis," the Security Council said in a statement after a closed-door briefing in New York  
Revised:  "The South African Mediation stated that it will continue its efforts ... to ensure the holding of free, fair and transparent elections in Côte d’ Ivoire as scheduled, which is the only solution to the crisis," the Security Council said in a statement after a closed-door briefing in New York 
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Original:  "The South African Mediation stated that it will continue its efforts ... to ensure the holding of free, fair and transparent elections in Cote d' Ivoire as scheduled, which is the only solution to the crisis," the Security Council said in a statement after a closed-door briefing in New York  
Revised:  "The South African Mediation stated that it will continue its efforts ... to ensure the holding of free, fair and transparent elections in Cote d' Ivoire as scheduled, which is the only solution to the crisis," the Security Council said in a statement following the meeting. 
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Original:  In 1995, Rotblat and the Pubwash Conferences on Science and World Affairs were awarded the Nobel Peace Prize, "for their efforts to diminish the part played by nuclear arms in international politics and, in the longer run, to eliminate such arms."
Revised:  In 1995, Rotblat and the Pugwash Conferences on Science and World Affairs were awarded the Nobel Peace Prize, "for their efforts to diminish the part played by nuclear arms in international politics and, in the longer run, to eliminate such arms."
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Original:  One of his most recent projects is the CCTV headquarters in Beijing.
Revised:  One of his most recent projects is the China Central Television (CCTV) headquarters building in Beijing.
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Original: Rem Koolhaas is reknown as one of the founders of the Office for Metropolitan Architecture (OMA) in 1975, and author of Delirious New York (1978) and S,M,L,XL (1995).
Revised: Rem Koolhaas is renown as one of the founders of the Office for Metropolitan Architecture (OMA) in 1975, and author of Delirious New York (1978) and S,M,L,XL (1995).
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Original:  The Biennale is located in Venice's Arsenal and Giardini and will be open until November 21
Revised:  Located in Venice's Arsenal and Giardini and will be open until November 21
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Original:  The Biennale is located in Venice's Arsenal and Giardini and will be open until November 21
Revised:  The Biennale is located in Venice's Arsenal and Giardini , the Biennale will be open until November 21
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Original: Washington and Oregon have seen the big picture and have opted for state incentives for businesses and individuals to install solar energy.
Revised: California's SB 1 Bill sought to provide incentives for businesses and individuals to install solar energy.
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Original:  But, under pressure from electrician's union, the bill now requires that instalation be done by licensed electricians, and that "prevailing (union) wages '' be paid for all solar work done in the state.
Revised:  But, under pressure from electrician's union, the bill now requires that instalation be done by licensed electricians, and that "prevailing (union) wages " be paid for all solar work done in the state.
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Original:  California's SB 1 Bill   sought to provide incentives for businesses and individuals to install rooftop solar panels, in a manor similar to existing programs in Washington and Oregon.
Revised:  California's SB 1 Bill The bill sought to provide incentives for businesses and individuals to install rooftop solar panels, in a manor similar to existing programs in Washington and Oregon.
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Original:  California's SB 1 Bill   sought to provide incentives for businesses and individuals to install rooftop solar panels, in a manor similar to existing programs in Washington and Oregon.
Revised:  California's SB 1 Bill sought to provide incentives for businesses and individuals to install rooftop solar panels, in a manner similar to existing programs in Washington and Oregon.
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Original:  But, under pressure from electrician's union, the bill now requires that instalation be done by licensed electricians , and that "prevailing (union) wages" be paid for all  solar work done in the state.
Revised:  Under pressure from the electrician's union, the bill now requires that instalation be done by licensed electricians , and that "prevailing (union) wages" be paid for all solar work done in the state.
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Original:  But, under pressure from electrician's union, the bill now requires that instalation be done by licensed electricians , and that "prevailing (union) wages" be paid for all  solar work done in the state.
Revised:  But, under pressure from electrician's union, the bill was amended to require that installation be done by licensed electricians , and that "prevailing (union) wages" be paid for all solar work done in the state.
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Original:  But, under pressure from electrician's union, the bill now requires that instalation be done by licensed electricians , and that "prevailing (union) wages" be paid for all  solar work done in the state.
Revised:  But, under pressure from electrician's union, the bill now requires that instalation be done by licensed electricians and that "prevailing (union) wages" be paid for all solar work done in the state.
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Original:  But, under pressure from electrician's union, the bill now requires that instalation be done by licensed electricians , and that "prevailing (union) wages" be paid for all  solar work done in the state.
Revised:  But, under pressure from electrician's union, the bill now requires that instalation be done by licensed electricians , and that "prevailing wages" be paid for all solar work done in the state.
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Original:  These changes have forced many of the bill's strongest supporters , Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger, to oppose it . Governor Schwarzenegger is now expected to veto the bill.
Revised:  These changes have forced many of the bill's strongest supporters 
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Original:  On November 2, 2003, she apparently laced his milkshake with sedatives and had beaten him to death in their apartment while he was unconscious, sources say.
Revised:  On November 2, 2003, she apparently laced his milkshake with sedatives and beat him to death in their apartment while he was unconscious, sources say.
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Original: She sat expressionless and clothed in black throughtout the trial, in which prosecutors painted a picture of her as a cold, calculating killer, who murdered her husband because of his desire to divorce her and take custody of their children after learning that she was having an affair with a repairman.
Revised: She sat expressionless and clothed in black throughout the trial, in which prosecutors painted a picture of her as a cold, calculating killer, who murdered her husband because of his desire to divorce her and take custody of their children after learning that she was having an affair with a repairman.
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Original: Iraqi president Jalal Talabani is personally opposed to captial punishment and stated that he would never sign a death sentence, not even against Saddam Hussein himself.
Revised: Iraqi president Jalal Talabani is personally opposed to capital punishment and stated that he would never sign a death sentence, not even against Saddam Hussein himself.
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Original:  Human rights groups and the United Nations had hoped Iraq would refrain from using the death penalty against its citizens and urged the government not to carry out the sentences  
Revised:  Human rights groups and the United Nations had hoped Iraq would refrain from using the death penalty against its citizens and urged the government not to carry out the sentences . 
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Original:  Three men convicted of murder were hanged on Thursday morning in Baghdad.
Revised:  Three men convicted of murder were hung on Thursday morning in Baghdad.
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Original:  Three men convicted of murder were hung on Thursday morning in Baghdad.
Revised:  Three men convicted of murder were hanged on Thursday morning in Baghdad.
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Original: The commemeration of the Battle of the Bulge draws a lot of american interest.
Revised: The commemoration of the Battle of the Bulge draws a lot of american interest.
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Original: The commemeration of the Battle of the Bulge draws a lot of american interest.
Revised: The commemeration of the Battle of the Bulge draws a lot of American interest.
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Original:  Dozens of american veterans are currently present to be at the celebratio
Revised:  Dozens of American veterans are currently present to be at the celebratio
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Original:  Dozens of american veterans are currently present to be at the celebratio
Revised:  Dozens of american veterans are currently present to attend the celebratio
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Original:  He answered:  "Nuts "!
Revised:  He answered: "Nuts 
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Original: 48-year old Alain Robert, affectionatley known as the 'French Spiderman', has climbed a 57-storey Sydney skyscraper without any equipment , wearing only trousers, a t-shirt and a cap, in 20 minutes.
Revised: 48-year old Alain Robert, affectionatley known as the 'French Spiderman', has climbed a 57-storey Sydney skyscraper without any equipment in 20 minutes.
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Original:  About 100 passers-by gathered to watch Robert, dressed in red trousers, a grey top  and a baseball cap, climb the building.
Revised:  About 100 passers-by gathered to watch Robert, dressed in red trousers, a grey top , and a baseball cap, climb the building.
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Original:  Eleven-year-old Rachel Pepper was surprised when he saw Robert, who suffers from permanent vertigo after two accidents in 1982, climbing the building.
Revised:  Eleven-year-old Rachel Pepper was surprised when he saw Robert, who suffers from permanent vertigo after two accidents in 1982.
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Original:  The purpose of Alain Robert's heroic actions was to raise awareness of global warming.
Revised:  The purpose of Alain Robert's actions was to raise awareness of global warming.
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Original: File:FrenchSpiderMan HongKong.jpg|Alain Robert, known as the 'French Spiderman', standing on a floodlight some sixty storeys above Hong Kong.
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Original:  48-year old Alain Robert , affectionately known as the ' French Spiderman ', has climbed a 57-storey Sydney skyscraper without any equipment in 20 minutes.
Revised:  48-year old , affectionately known as the ' French Spiderman ', has climbed a 57-storey Sydney skyscraper without any equipment in 20 minutes.
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Original:  48-year old Alain Robert , affectionately known as the ' French Spiderman ', has climbed a 57-storey Sydney skyscraper without any equipment in 20 minutes.
Revised:  48-year old Alain Robert , affectionately known as the ' ', has climbed a 57-storey Sydney skyscraper without any equipment in 20 minutes.
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Original:  The purpose of Alain Robert's actions was to raise awareness of global warming .
Revised:  The purpose of Alain Robert's actions was to raise awareness of .
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Original:  Since then, he has climbed over eighty buildings around the world, including the Eiffel Tower, The New York Times building, and Sydney Harbour Bridge .
Revised:  Since then, he has climbed over eighty buildings around the world, including the , , and .
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Original:  His most recent climb, which he completed in twenty minutes, began at the bottom of the Lumiere building in Bathurst Street at 10:30am AEST on Monday morning.
Revised:  His most recent climb, which he completed in twenty minutes, began at the bottom of the Lumiere building in at 10:30am AEST on Monday morning.
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Original:  Eleven-year-old Rachel Pepper was surprised when he saw Robert, who suffers from permanent vertigo after two accidents in 1982.
Revised:  Eleven-year-old Rachel Pepper was surprised when he saw Robert, who suffers from permanent after two accidents in 1982.
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Original:  Robert was granted conditional bail to appear at the Downing Centre Local Court on Friday.
Revised:  Robert was granted conditional bail to appear at the Local Court on Friday.
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Original: They used external PacWireless 2-foot dishes designed by Trango to connect two mountaintops in Idaho.
Revised: They used external PacWireless 2-foot dishes from Trango to connect two mountaintops in Idaho.
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Original: Microserv Computer Technologies (Internet Service Provider) and Trango Broadband Wireless (fixed-wireless equipment maker) announced on Tuesday August 11th 2005 that they wirelessly transmitted data over unlicensed spectrum 137.2 miles .
Revised: Microserv Computer Technologies (Internet Service Provider) and Trango Broadband Wireless (fixed-wireless equipment maker) announced on Tuesday August 11th 2005 that they wirelessly transmitted data 137.2 miles .
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Original:  They were operating on the 2.4GHz and 5.8 Ghz wireless spectrum, not the standard 802.11 wireless technology .
Revised:  They were operating on the 2.4GHz and 5.8 Ghz wireless spectrum, not the standard 802.11 wireless frequency .
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Original:  This claim of transmission record has been contested by current record holders (Defcon Wifi Shootout Contest).
Revised:  This claim of transmission record has been contested by current record holders (Defcon WiFi Shootout Contest).
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Original:  "What sets apart the 125-mile record set at the Defcon Wifi Shootout Contest is that it was subject to a strict verification and certification process administered by four independent judges."
Revised:  "What sets apart the 125-mile record set at the Defcon WiFi Shootout Contest is that it was subject to a strict verification and certification process administered by four independent judges."
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Original: 100px|FC Barcelona A Brazilian international footballer, Ronaldo de Assis Moreira, also known as Little Ronaldo (Ronaldinho), signed a contract with FC Barcelona until 2010  today, prolonging it for two years.
Revised: 100px|FC Barcelona A Brazilian international footballer, Ronaldo de Assis Moreira, also known as Little Ronaldo (Ronaldinho), signed a contract with FC Barcelona until 2010 , today, prolonging it for two years.
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Original:  It is fairly certain that he will stay in the club for the lenght of the contract.
Revised:  It is fairly certain that he will stay in the club for the length of the contract.
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Original:  "Now I'll just carry on doing the same as I have been doing until now, only that now I have a longer term contract, I'll be even more motivated,"  official Barcelona website quoted Ronaldinho.
Revised:  "Now I'll just carry on doing the same as I have been doing until now, only that now I have a longer term contract, I'll be even more motivated," an official Barcelona website quoted Ronaldinho.
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Original:  One of the most interested teams was Chelsea FC, who were looking to fill in the striker position.
Revised:  One of the most interested teams was Chelsea FC, who were looking to fill their striker position.
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