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Original:  <p> Mr Mohamed Sa'eed, an leading figure in the Iraqi Supreme Council for Islamic Revolution, has castigated those responsible for the threats saying: 'and now groups from abroad come carrying temporary ideology that did not exist even in the middle ages,' then stated that there 'should be no compulsion in religion' whilst calling for juristic and intellectual work to defeat extremism
Revised:  Mr. Mohamed Sa'eed, an leading figure in the Iraqi Supreme Council for Islamic Revolution, has castigated those responsible for the threats saying: 'and now groups from abroad come carrying temporary ideology that did not exist even in the middle ages,' then stated that there 'should be no compulsion in religion' whilst calling for juristic and intellectual work to defeat extremism
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Original:  In a conference call with reporters, FDA officials remarked that they were concerned the silicone could enter the bloodstream of a patient, although, to date, no harm from this has been reported  [  
Revised:  In a conference call with reporters, FDA officials remarked that they were concerned the silicone could enter the bloodstream of a patient, although, to date, no harm from this has been reported . [ 
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Original:  In a conference call with reporters, FDA officials remarked that they were concerned the silicone could enter the bloodstream of a patient, although, to date, no harm from this has been reported  [  
Revised:  In a conference call with reporters, FDA officials remarked that they were concerned the silicone could enter the bloodstream of a patient, although, to date, no harm from this has been reported [... 
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Original:  "[...] Hospitals, clinics and patients who have needles from these lists should immediately stop using these affected products and return any unused products to Exelint International Corporation."  ] 
Revised:  "[...] Hospitals, clinics and patients who have needles from these lists should immediately stop using these affected products and return any unused products to Exelint International Corporation." ...] 
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Original:  Recalled needles were manufactured from January 2007 to August 2009  " read a statement on the FDA's website.
Revised:  Recalled needles were manufactured from January 2007 to August 2009 , " read a statement on the FDA's website.
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Original: Bernard Ebbers Bernard Ebbers, founder and former CEO of WorldCom, now MCI, was sentenced to 25 years in prison for his role in the largest corporate accounting fraud in history that totaled the amount of $11 billion that plunged the once powerful company into bankruptcy.
Revised: Bernard Ebbers Bernard Ebbers, founder and former CEO of WorldCom, now MCI, was sentenced to 25 years in prison for his role in the largest corporate accounting fraud in history . The fraud, totaling US $11 billion that plunged the once powerful company into bankruptcy.
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Original: Bernard Ebbers Bernard Ebbers, founder and former CEO of WorldCom, now MCI, was sentenced to 25 years in prison for his role in the largest corporate accounting fraud in history that totaled the amount of $11 billion that plunged the once powerful company into bankruptcy.
Revised: Bernard Ebbers Bernard Ebbers, founder and former CEO of WorldCom, now MCI, was sentenced to 25 years in prison for his role in the largest corporate accounting fraud in history that totaled the amount of $11 billion , plunged the once-powerful company into bankruptcy.
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Original:  Jones believed Ebbers deserves a harsh sentence.
Revised:  Jones believed Ebbers deserved a harsh sentence.
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Original:  Ebbers  who is 63, asked for a lenient sentence due to his failing health and a heart condition and because of his philanthropy.
Revised:  Ebbers , who is 63, asked for a lenient sentence due to his failing health and a heart condition and because of his philanthropy.
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Original:  Ebbers'  first day of prison will be October 12.
Revised:  Ebbers' s first day of prison will be October 12.
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Original:  In March, Ebbers was found guilty of fraud and conspiracyand was guilty on seven counts of filing false documents.
Revised:  In March, Ebbers was found guilty of fraud , conspiracy, and seven counts of filing false documents.
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Original: The sentence was handed down by Manhattan federal court Judge Barbara S. Jones , who said " Mr. Ebbers was the instigator of the fraud." Jones believed Ebbers deserved a harsh sentence.
Revised: The sentence was handed down by Manhattan federal court Judge Barbara S. Jones . Mr. Ebbers was the instigator of the fraud." Jones believed Ebbers deserved a harsh sentence.
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Original: Bernard Ebbers Bernard Ebbers, founder and former CEO of telecommunications giant WorldCom, now MCI, was sentenced to 25 years in prison for his role in the  largest corporate accounting fraud in history.
Revised: Bernard Ebbers Bernard Ebbers, founder and former CEO of telecommunications giant WorldCom, now MCI, was sentenced to 25 years in prison for his role in the accounting scheme that inflated profits and led to the largest corporate accounting fraud in history.
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Original: Bernard Ebbers Bernard Ebbers, founder and former CEO of telecommunications giant WorldCom, now MCI, was sentenced to 25 years in prison for his role in the accounting scheme that inflated profits and led to the largest corporate accounting fraud in history.
Revised: Bernard Ebbers Bernard Ebbers, founder and former CEO of telecommunications giant WorldCom, now MCI, was sentenced to 25 years in prison for his role in the corporate accounting fraud in history.
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Original:  The fraud, totaling US$11 billion , plunged the once-powerful company  into bankruptcy.
Revised:  The fraud, totaling US$11 billion . The once-powerful company into bankruptcy.
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Original:  The fraud, totaling US$11 billion , plunged the once-powerful company  into bankruptcy.
Revised:  The fraud, totaling US$11 billion , plunged the once-powerful company was plunged into bankruptcy.
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Original: Prosecutors pushed for a life sentence.
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Original:  The enormity of the crimes that Ebbers committed cannot be overstated: "The fraud at WorldCom was the largest securities fraud in history," prosecutors wrote in papers filed last month  .
Revised:  The enormity of the crimes that Ebbers committed cannot be overstated: the fraud at WorldCom was the largest securities fraud in history," prosecutors wrote in papers filed last month .
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Original:  Artillery shells have been fired by w: North Korea near the disputed sea-border between w: South Korea, who has returned fire.
Revised:  Artillery shells have been fired by North Korea near the disputed sea-border between w: South Korea, who has returned fire.
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Original:  Artillery shells have been fired by w: North Korea near the disputed sea-border between w: South Korea, who has returned fire.
Revised:  Artillery shells have been fired by w: North Korea near the disputed sea-border between South Korea, who has returned fire.
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Original:  Artillery shells have been fired by North Korea near the disputed sea-border between South Korea, who has returned fire.
Revised:  North Korea and South Korea have exchanged fire near the disputed sea-border between South Korea, who has returned fire.
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Original:  North Korea fired approximately thirty shots into the water on their side of the border, near the South Korean Baengnyeong Island at 0900 local time (0000 UTC).
Revised:  North Korea fired approximately thirty shots into the water on their side of the border, near South Korea's Baengnyeong Island at 0900 local time (0000 UTC).
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Original:  Tthe South retaliated with around 100 shots.
Revised:  The South retaliated with around 100 shots.
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Original:  This takes place just days after North Korea declared a 'no-sail' zone off its coastal waters on Tuesday, and is not the first skirmish around the Military Demarcation Line , the most recent  in November 2009, when a North Korean vessel took "considerable damage" after puportedly crossing the border.
Revised:  This latest incident comes after North Korea declared a 'no-sail' zone off its coastal waters on Tuesday, and is not the first skirmish around the Military Demarcation Line , the most recent in November 2009, when a North Korean vessel took "considerable damage" after puportedly crossing the border.
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Original:  This takes place just days after North Korea declared a 'no-sail' zone off its coastal waters on Tuesday, and is not the first skirmish around the Military Demarcation Line , the most recent  in November 2009, when a North Korean vessel took "considerable damage" after puportedly crossing the border.
Revised:  This takes place just days after North Korea declared a 'no-sail' zone off its coastal waters on Tuesday, and is not the first skirmish around the Military Demarcation Line – the most recent in November 2009, when a North Korean vessel took "considerable damage" after puportedly crossing the border.
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Original:  This takes place just days after North Korea declared a 'no-sail' zone off its coastal waters on Tuesday, and is not the first skirmish around the Military Demarcation Line , the most recent  in November 2009, when a North Korean vessel took "considerable damage" after puportedly crossing the border.
Revised:  This takes place just days after North Korea declared a 'no-sail' zone off its coastal waters on Tuesday, and is not the first skirmish around the Military Demarcation Line , the most recent was in November 2009, when a North Korean vessel took "considerable damage" after puportedly crossing the border.
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Original:  This takes place just days after North Korea declared a 'no-sail' zone off its coastal waters on Tuesday, and is not the first skirmish around the Military Demarcation Line , the most recent  in November 2009, when a North Korean vessel took "considerable damage" after puportedly crossing the border.
Revised:  This takes place just days after North Korea declared a 'no-sail' zone off its coastal waters on Tuesday, and is not the first skirmish around the Military Demarcation Line , the most recent in November 2009, when a North Korean vessel took "considerable damage" after allegedly crossing the border.
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Original:  No casualties have been reported
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Original:  Professor Ken Carslaw  of the University of Leeds , a co-author of the paper, warned that as the  hole healed, warming in parts of the Southern Hemisphere could accelerate.
Revised:  Professor Ken Carslaw , of the University of Leeds , a co-author of the paper, warned that as the hole healed, warming in parts of the Southern Hemisphere could accelerate.
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Original:   Judith Perlwitz, a resercher at the US National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, said that the  data were sound but she disagreed with some of the paper's conclusions.
Revised:  Judith Perlwitz, a resercher at the US National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, said that the group's data were sound but she disagreed with some of the paper's conclusions.
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Original: After the 7 July London bombings, a staement was made by an Al Qaida affiliated group claiming responbiility for the London attacks.
Revised: After the 7 July London bombings, a statement was made by an Al Qaida affiliated group claiming responbiility for the London attacks.
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Original: After the 7 July London bombings, a staement was made by an Al Qaida affiliated group claiming responbiility for the London attacks.
Revised: After the 7 July London bombings, a staement was made by an Al Qaida affiliated group claiming responsibility for the London attacks.
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Original:  In it, Denmark and Italy were specfically threatened with attacks "in the same way if they do not withdraw their troops from Iraq and Afghanistan.   
Revised:  In it, Denmark and Italy were specifically threatened with attacks "in the same way if they do not withdraw their troops from Iraq and Afghanistan. 
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Original:  In it, Denmark and Italy were specfically threatened with attacks "in the same way if they do not withdraw their troops from Iraq and Afghanistan.   
Revised:  In it, Denmark and Italy were specfically threatened with attacks "in the same way if they do not withdraw their troops from Iraq and Afghanistan. " 
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Original:  In it, Denmark and Italy were specifically threatened with attacks "in the same way if they do not withdraw their troops from Iraq and Afghanistan."
Revised:  In it, Denmark and Italy were specifically warned of attacks "in the same way if they do not withdraw their troops from Iraq and Afghanistan."
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Original:  It comes a day after the Minister of the Interior Giuseppe Pisanu warned of the potential threat posed  extremists, saying that "terrorism is knocking on Italy's door".
Revised:  It comes a day after the Minister of the Interior Giuseppe Pisanu warned of the potential threat posed by extremists, saying that "terrorism is knocking on Italy's door".
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Original:  His testimony comes only a day after Michael Wood—a former foreign office legal advisor — told the inquiry that his own advice, that a further resolution was required, was ignored in favour of Goldsmith's.
Revised:  His testimony comes only a day after former foreign office legal advisor — told the inquiry that his own advice, that a further resolution was required, was ignored in favour of Goldsmith's.
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Original:  His testimony comes only a day after Michael Wood—a former foreign office legal advisor — told the inquiry that his own advice, that a further resolution was required, was ignored in favour of Goldsmith's.
Revised:  His testimony comes only a day after Michael Wood—a former foreign office legal advisor Michael Wood told the inquiry that his own advice, that a further resolution was required, was ignored in favour of Goldsmith's.
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Original:  Goldsmith came under suspicion because he had consistently said that it would be "safer" if a further resolution were obtained—since it would have put the "matter beyond doubt and nobody could have challenged the legality"—before changing his mind and giving the "green light" only a month before the invasion.
Revised:  Goldsmith 's account was under scrutiny because he had consistently said that it would be "safer" if a further resolution were obtained—since it would have put the "matter beyond doubt and nobody could have challenged the legality"—before changing his mind and giving the "green light" only a month before the invasion.
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Original:  Until February 2002, he believed that a new resolution would be required, but he says that—after discussions with US and UK diplomats—he realised the "true meaning" of United Nations Security Council Resolution 1441 and that it would "revive  " the authority of the United Kingdom to use force, as outlined in previous resolutions.
Revised:  Until February 2002, he believed that a new resolution would be required, but he said today that—after discussions with US and UK diplomats—he realised the "true meaning" of United Nations Security Council Resolution 1441 and that it would "revive " the authority of the United Kingdom to use force, as outlined in previous resolutions.
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Original:  Until February 2002, he believed that a new resolution would be required, but he says that—after discussions with US and UK diplomats—he realised the "true meaning" of United Nations Security Council Resolution 1441 and that it would "revive  " the authority of the United Kingdom to use force, as outlined in previous resolutions.
Revised:  Until February 2002, he believed that a new resolution would be required, but he says that—after discussions with US and UK diplomats—he realised that United Nations Security Council Resolution 1441 and that it would "revive " the authority of the United Kingdom to use force, as outlined in previous resolutions.
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Original:  Until February 2002, he believed that a new resolution would be required, but he says that—after discussions with US and UK diplomats—he realised the "true meaning" of United Nations Security Council Resolution 1441 and that it would "revive  " the authority of the United Kingdom to use force, as outlined in previous resolutions.
Revised:  Until February 2002, he believed that a new resolution would be required, but he says that—after discussions with US and UK diplomats—he realised the "true meaning" of United Nations Security Council Resolution 1441 "revive " the authority of the United Kingdom to use force, as outlined in previous resolutions.
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Original:  Until February 2002, he believed that a new resolution would be required, but he says that—after discussions with US and UK diplomats—he realised the "true meaning" of United Nations Security Council Resolution 1441 and that it would "revive  " the authority of the United Kingdom to use force, as outlined in previous resolutions.
Revised:  Until February 2002, he believed that a new resolution would be required, but he says that—after discussions with US and UK diplomats—he realised the "true meaning" of United Nations Security Council Resolution 1441 and that it would "revive d " the authority of the United Kingdom to use force, as outlined in previous resolutions.
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Original:  One of these resolutions was United Nations Security Council Resolution 678, which was passed in November 1990.
Revised:  One of these was United Nations Security Council Resolution 678, which was passed in November 1990.
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Original:  It  " Authorizes Member States co-operating with the Government of Kuwait ... to use all necessary means to uphold and implement resolution 660 (1990) and all subsequent relevant resolutions and to restore international peace and security in the area" against Iraq if Saddam Hussein failed to give up his weapons of mass destruction.
Revised:  It authorized " Authorizes Member States co-operating with the Government of Kuwait ... to use all necessary means to uphold and implement resolution 660 (1990) and all subsequent relevant resolutions and to restore international peace and security in the area" against Iraq if Saddam Hussein failed to give up his weapons of mass destruction.
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Original:  It  " Authorizes Member States co-operating with the Government of Kuwait ... to use all necessary means to uphold and implement resolution 660 (1990) and all subsequent relevant resolutions and to restore international peace and security in the area" against Iraq if Saddam Hussein failed to give up his weapons of mass destruction.
Revised:  It " Member States co-operating with the Government of Kuwait ... to use all necessary means to uphold and implement resolution 660 (1990) and all subsequent relevant resolutions and to restore international peace and security in the area" against Iraq if Saddam Hussein failed to give up his weapons of mass destruction.
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Original:  However, he also says , "The prime minister made it clear that he accepted that it was for me to reach a judgement and he had to accept it." Goldsmith also admits that he ignored the advice of other legal advisors, including Michael Wood (who spoke before the inquiry yesterday) and Elizabeth Wilmshurst (who resigned in protest days before the invasion), who both said that invading Iraq without a new UN resolution would amount to the "crime of aggression".
Revised:  However, he added , "The prime minister made it clear that he accepted that it was for me to reach a judgement and he had to accept it." Goldsmith also admits that he ignored the advice of other legal advisors, including Michael Wood (who spoke before the inquiry yesterday) and Elizabeth Wilmshurst (who resigned in protest days before the invasion), who both said that invading Iraq without a new UN resolution would amount to the "crime of aggression".
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Original:  However, he also says , "The prime minister made it clear that he accepted that it was for me to reach a judgement and he had to accept it." Goldsmith also admits that he ignored the advice of other legal advisors, including Michael Wood (who spoke before the inquiry yesterday) and Elizabeth Wilmshurst (who resigned in protest days before the invasion), who both said that invading Iraq without a new UN resolution would amount to the "crime of aggression".
Revised:  However, he also says , "The prime minister made it clear that he accepted that it was for me to reach a judgement and he had to accept it." Goldsmith agreed that he ignored the advice of other legal advisors, including Michael Wood (who spoke before the inquiry yesterday) and Elizabeth Wilmshurst (who resigned in protest days before the invasion), who both said that invading Iraq without a new UN resolution would amount to the "crime of aggression".
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Original:  Goldsmith claims to have "paid great attention to what their views were," and says , "Ultimately I disagreed with the views they took."
Revised:  Goldsmith claimed to have "paid great attention to what their views were," and says , "Ultimately I disagreed with the views they took."
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Original:  Goldsmith claims to have "paid great attention to what their views were," and says , "Ultimately I disagreed with the views they took."
Revised:  Goldsmith claims to have "paid great attention to what their views were," but added , "Ultimately I disagreed with the views they took."
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Original:  He denies changing his mind only days before the invasion, as some have claimed, saying that he had advised the government that the war would be legal as far back as February, and that his advice was "consistent".
Revised:  He denied changing his mind only days before the invasion, as some have claimed, saying that he had advised the government that the war would be legal as far back as February, and that his advice was "consistent".
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Original:  He said that he "was ready to answer questions" and intended to debate the issue with the cabinet, but was told that they would read his advice before moving on to different issues and he says the debate did not take place.
Revised:  He said that he "was ready to answer questions" and intended to debate the issue with the cabinet, but was told that they would read his advice before moving on to different issues . He said that the debate did not take place.
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Original:  He told the inquiry that he believes the cabinet ministers considered the planned debate to be "a slightly sterile exercise".
Revised:  He told the inquiry that he believes cabinet ministers considered the planned debate to be "a slightly sterile exercise".
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Original:  He told the inquiry that he believes the cabinet ministers considered the planned debate to be "a slightly sterile exercise".
Revised:  He told the inquiry that he believes the cabinet ministers considered it to be "a slightly sterile exercise".
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Original:  He is also concerned that the cabinet ignored, or was unaware of, the caveats included in his March advice on the war's legality, in which he said that "the safest legal course" would be to get a new resolution, despite a "reasonable case" being available based on existing resolutions.
Revised:  He was also concerned that the cabinet ignored, or was unaware of, the caveats included in his March advice on the war's legality, in which he said that "the safest legal course" would be to get a new resolution, despite a "reasonable case" being available based on existing resolutions.
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