wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  In 1992, he was promoted as one-star admiral, Cdre. . He served as a commanding officerof the elite Special Services Group Navy until he was appointed as the director naval intelligence in 1992.
Revised:  In 1992, he was promoted as one-star admiral, Cdre. . He served as a commanding officer of the elite Special Services Group Navy until he was appointed as the director naval intelligence in 1992.
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Original:  He was among the other officers who investigated the rumors that surrounded the controversial arms deal signed with France as early as 1994 to 1995.
Revised:  He was among the officers who investigated the rumors that surrounded the controversial arms deal signed with France as early as 1994 to 1995.
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Original:  He was among the other officers who investigated the rumors that surrounded the controversial arms deal signed with France as early as 1994 to 1995.
Revised:  He was among the other officers who investigated the rumors surrounding acontroversial arms deal signed with France as early as 1994 to 1995.
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Original:  Based on an accidental tip and reference received in sting intelligence R-Adm.
Revised:  Based on an accidental tip and reference received in sting intelligence ,
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Original:  Iqbal eventually met with Zafar Iqbal in Karachi and arrested him to reveal the information of the parties that were being paid to the public and military officials.
Revised:  Iqbal eventually met with Zafar Iqbal in Karachi and arrested him to reveal information about the parties that were being paid to the public and military officials.
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Original:  Iqbal eventually met with Zafar Iqbal in Karachi and arrested him to reveal the information of the parties that were being paid to the public and military officials.
Revised:  Iqbal eventually met with Zafar Iqbal in Karachi and arrested him to reveal the information of the parties that were being paid among public and military officials.
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Original:  Shahid Ashraf related to the investigations .
Revised:  Shahid Ashraf .
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Original:  While commenting on his service-promotion, Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to the news reportersthat "Adm.
Revised:  While commenting on his service-promotion, Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to news reporters: "Adm.
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Original:  Saeed Khan was the real person to take away big chuck of the deal because the deal was implemented in his tenure ". Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
Revised:  Saeed Khan was the real person to take away big chunk of the deal because the deal was implemented in his tenure ". Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
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Original:  Saeed Khan was the real person to take away big chuck of the deal because the deal was implemented in his tenure ". Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
Revised:  Saeed Khan was the real person to take away big chuck of the deal because the deal was implemented in his tenure ." Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
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Original:  Apart from serving as the commander of the Karachi Coastal Command and Pakistan Fleet Command from 1994 –98 , Iqbal also served on a command level.
Revised:  Apart from serving as the commander of the Karachi Coastal Command and Pakistan Fleet Command from 1994 to 1998 , Iqbal also served on a command level.
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Original:  In 1998, Iqbal decided to take retirement from the Navy, and was eventually appointed as the Ambassador of Pakistan to Tunisia until 2004.
Revised:  In 1998, Iqbal decided to retire from the Navy, and was eventually appointed as the Ambassador of Pakistan to Tunisia until 2004.
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Original:  He continued serving in the Foreign Service despite facing opposing views of military takeover of the civilian government.
Revised:  He continued serving in the Foreign Service despite opposing the military takeover of the civilian government.
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Original:  In 2011, he opposed the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt Osama bin Laden.
Revised:  In 2011, he criticised the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt Osama bin Laden.
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Original:  In 2011, he opposed the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt Osama bin Laden.
Revised:  In 2011, he opposed the Pakistan military's failure to realize the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt Osama bin Laden.
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Original:  In 2011, he opposed the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt Osama bin Laden.
Revised:  In 2011, he opposed the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the compound in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt Osama bin Laden.
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Original:  In 2011, he opposed the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt Osama bin Laden.
Revised:  In 2011, he opposed the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to find Osama bin Laden.
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Original:  He is currently residing in Lahore, and has raised his concerns about the trials against Pervez Musharraf for illegally overtaking the civilian government in 1999. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Pakistan Navy
Revised:  He is currently residing in Lahore, and has raised his concerns about the trials of Pervez Musharraf for illegally overtaking the civilian government in 1999. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Pakistan Navy
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Original:  He is currently residing in Lahore, and has raised his concerns about the trials against Pervez Musharraf for illegally overtaking the civilian government in 1999. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Pakistan Navy
Revised:  He is currently residing in Lahore, and has raised his concerns about the trials against Pervez Musharraf for illegally taking over the civilian government in 1999. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Pakistan Navy
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Original:  Then, he was a professor of plastic arts in the division of the scientific sports and cultural activities (DASCS), at the university of Constantine 3. since 2018, He exercises the plastic art within his workshop in Denain, France. works were exposed in Padua in Italy, in Vilnius in Lithuania 2016, in Barcelona, in France, in Antwerpen in Belgium, in Rotterdam in Netherlands in 2017.
Revised:  Then, he was a professor of plastic arts in the division of the scientific sports and cultural activities (DASCS), at the University of Constantine 3. since 2018, He exercises the plastic art within his workshop in Denain, France. works were exposed in Padua in Italy, in Vilnius in Lithuania 2016, in Barcelona, in France, in Antwerpen in Belgium, in Rotterdam in Netherlands in 2017.
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Original: Collective 2016 : Musée Mediolanum in Padoue en Italy.
Revised: Collective 2016 : Musée Mediolanum in Padua in Italy.
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Original:  2017 : Centre culturel de Montjuic Barcelona, Espagne . 2017 : Office de tourisme Camiers, Ste Cécile, France 2017 : Neutral-ism Musée Nereto, Italy.
Revised:  2017 : Centre culturel de Montjuic Barcelona, Spain . 2017 : Office de tourisme Camiers, Ste Cécile, France 2017 : Neutral-ism Musée Nereto, Italy.
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Original:  Then, he was a professor of plastic arts in the division of the scientific sports and cultural activities (DASCS), at the University of Constantine 3. since 2018, He exercises the plastic art within his workshop in Denain, France. works were exposed in Padua in Italy, in Vilnius in Lithuania 2016, in Barcelona, in France, in Antwerpen in Belgium, in Rotterdam in Netherlands in 2017.
Revised:  Then, he was a professor of plastic arts in the division of the scientific sports and cultural activities (DASCS), at the University of Constantine 3. since 2018, He exercises the plastic art within his workshop in Denain, France. works were exposed in Padua in Italy, in Vilnius in Lithuania 2016, in Barcelona, in France, in Antwerp in Belgium, in Rotterdam in Netherlands in 2017.
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Original:  Amazon books link with "look inside" preview availab 
Revised:  Amazon books link with "look inside" preview available 
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Original:  Amazon books link with "look inside" preview availab 
Revised:  Amazon books link with "look inside" preview availab Reference
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Original: The Women’s group at CREA Safo Women Group, retrieved 10 September 2009     Publications Gómez, J. (2014).
Revised: The Women’s group at CREA Safo Women Group, retrieved 10 September 2009 . Publications Gómez, J. (2014).
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Original: In addition, other critical pedagogues have described radical love in other terms (e.g., Paulo Freire and Joe Kincheloe, see URL Radical Love: Remembering Freire, Joe, and Pato Aitor Gómez, José Miguel Jiménez.
Revised: In addition, other critical pedagogues have described radical love in other terms (e.g., Paulo Freire and Joe L. Kincheloe Radical Love: Remembering Freire, Joe, and Pato Aitor Gómez, José Miguel Jiménez.
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Original: In addition, other critical pedagogues have described radical love in other terms (e.g., Paulo Freire and Joe L. Kincheloe  . Radical Love: Remembering Freire, Joe, and Pato Aitor Gómez, José Miguel Jiménez.
Revised: In addition, other critical pedagogues have described radical love in other terms (e.g., Paulo Freire and Joe L. Kincheloe ) . Radical Love: Remembering Freire, Joe, and Pato Aitor Gómez, José Miguel Jiménez.
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Original: Gladys Chepkirui Ngetich (born c.1991) is a Kenyan engineer, and a Rhodes scholar  pursuing a doctorate degree in aerospace engineering at the University of Oxford, in the United Kingdom.
Revised: Gladys Chepkirui Ngetich (born c.1991) is a Kenyan engineer, and a Rhodes scholar , pursuing a doctorate degree in aerospace engineering at the University of Oxford, in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Examples of these initiatives are National Science Foundation DataNet projects, DataONE and the Data Conservancy.
Revised:  Examples of these initiatives are National Science Foundation Datanet projects, DataONE and the Data Conservancy.
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Original:  Examples of these initiatives are National Science Foundation DataNet projects, DataONE and the Data Conservancy.
Revised:  Examples of these initiatives are National Science Foundation DataNet projects, DataONE and Data Conservancy.
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Original: External links ecoinformatics.org -- Online Resource for Managing Ecological Data and Information Ecoinformatics Collaboratory-- Research links and public wiki for discussion.
Revised: External links ecoinformatics.org , Online Resource for Managing Ecological Data and Information Ecoinformatics Collaboratory-- Research links and public wiki for discussion.
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Original: External links ecoinformatics.org -- Online Resource for Managing Ecological Data and Information Ecoinformatics Collaboratory-- Research links and public wiki for discussion.
Revised: External links ecoinformatics.org -- Online Resource for Managing Ecological Data and Information Ecoinformatics Collaboratory, Research links and public wiki for discussion.
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Original:  Ecoinformatics Education-- Ecosystem Informatics at Oregon State University industrial Environmental Informatics-- Industrial Environmental Informatics at HTW-Berlin, University of Applied Sciences International Society for Ecological Informatics Canadian Facility for Ecoinformatics Research -
Revised:  Ecoinformatics Education, Ecosystem Informatics at Oregon State University industrial Environmental Informatics-- Industrial Environmental Informatics at HTW-Berlin, University of Applied Sciences International Society for Ecological Informatics Canadian Facility for Ecoinformatics Research -
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Original:  Ecoinformatics Education-- Ecosystem Informatics at Oregon State University industrial Environmental Informatics-- Industrial Environmental Informatics at HTW-Berlin, University of Applied Sciences International Society for Ecological Informatics Canadian Facility for Ecoinformatics Research -
Revised:  Ecoinformatics Education-- Ecosystem Informatics at Oregon State University industrial Environmental Informatics, Industrial Environmental Informatics at HTW-Berlin, University of Applied Sciences International Society for Ecological Informatics Canadian Facility for Ecoinformatics Research -
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Original: - Eco Informatics Centre at the Ashoka Trust for Research in Ecology and the Environment (ATREE) Ecoinformatics program at the National Center for Ecological Analysis & Synthesis Ecological Informatics: An International Journal on Ecoinformatics and Computational Ecology Ecological Data NSF DataNet call for proposals DataONE Data Conservancy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% -- EcoInformatics Summer Institute, an NSF-funded REU site (Research Experience for Undergraduates)
Revised: - Eco Informatics Centre at the Ashoka Trust for Research in Ecology and the Environment (ATREE) Ecoinformatics program at the National Center for Ecological Analysis & Synthesis Ecological Informatics: An International Journal on Ecoinformatics and Computational Ecology Ecological Data NSF DataNet call for proposals DataONE Data Conservancy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% -- EcoInformatics Summer Institute, an NSF-funded REU site (Research Experience for Undergraduates)
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Original: - Eco Informatics Centre at the Ashoka Trust for Research in Ecology and the Environment (ATREE) Ecoinformatics program at the National Center for Ecological Analysis & Synthesis Ecological Informatics: An International Journal on Ecoinformatics and Computational Ecology Ecological Data NSF DataNet call for proposals DataONE Data Conservancy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% -- EcoInformatics Summer Institute, an NSF-funded REU site (Research Experience for Undergraduates)
Revised: - Eco Informatics Centre at the Ashoka Trust for Research in Ecology and the Environment (ATREE) Ecoinformatics program at the National Center for Ecological Analysis & Synthesis Ecological Informatics: An International Journal on Ecoinformatics and Computational Ecology Ecological Data NSF DataNet call for proposals Data Conservancy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% -- EcoInformatics Summer Institute, an NSF-funded REU site (Research Experience for Undergraduates)
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Original: - Eco Informatics Centre at the Ashoka Trust for Research in Ecology and the Environment (ATREE) Ecoinformatics program at the National Center for Ecological Analysis & Synthesis Ecological Informatics: An International Journal on Ecoinformatics and Computational Ecology Ecological Data NSF DataNet call for proposals DataONE Data Conservancy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% -- EcoInformatics Summer Institute, an NSF-funded REU site (Research Experience for Undergraduates)
Revised: - Eco Informatics Centre at the Ashoka Trust for Research in Ecology and the Environment (ATREE) Ecoinformatics program at the National Center for Ecological Analysis & Synthesis Ecological Informatics: An International Journal on Ecoinformatics and Computational Ecology Ecological Data NSF DataNet call for proposals DataONE %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% -- EcoInformatics Summer Institute, an NSF-funded REU site (Research Experience for Undergraduates)
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Original: - Eco Informatics Centre at the Ashoka Trust for Research in Ecology and the Environment (ATREE) Ecoinformatics program at the National Center for Ecological Analysis & Synthesis Ecological Informatics: An International Journal on Ecoinformatics and Computational Ecology Ecological Data NSF DataNet call for proposals DataONE Data Conservancy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% -- EcoInformatics Summer Institute, an NSF-funded REU site (Research Experience for Undergraduates)
Revised: - Eco Informatics Centre at the Ashoka Trust for Research in Ecology and the Environment (ATREE) Ecoinformatics program at the National Center for Ecological Analysis & Synthesis Ecological Informatics: An International Journal on Ecoinformatics and Computational Ecology Ecological Data NSF DataNet call for proposals DataONE Data Conservancy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% DataONE Data Conservancy , EcoInformatics Summer Institute, an NSF-funded REU site (Research Experience for Undergraduates)
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Original: Finnis souterrain, also know locally as Binder's Cove, is an excavated drystone souterrain in Finnis (), south of Dromara, County Down, Northern Ireland.
Revised: Finnis souterrain, also known locally as Binder's Cove, is an excavated drystone souterrain in Finnis (), south of Dromara, County Down, Northern Ireland.
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Original: Grigory Martirosyan (born 14 November 1978) is a politician currently serving as the State Minister of the de facto independent Republic of Artsakh since 2018.
Revised: Grigory Martirosyan (born 14 November 1978) is a politician currently serving as the State Minister of the self-proclaimed Republic of Artsakh since 2018.
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Original: Grigory Martirosyan (born 14 November 1978) is a politician currently serving as the State Minister of the self-proclaimed Republic of Artsakh since 2018.
Revised: Grigory Martirosyan (born 14 November 1978) is a politician currently serving as the State Minister of the de facto independent Republic of Artsakh since 2018.
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Original:  Biography Martirosyan was born on November 14, 1978, in Stepanakert, the capital of the Nagorno-Karabakh Autonomous Oblast, then part of Azerbaijan SSR . In 1999, he graduated from Artsakh State University with a B.A. in economics.
Revised:  Biography Martirosyan was born on November 14, 1978, in Stepanakert, the capital of the Republic of Artsakh . In 1999, he graduated from Artsakh State University with a B.A. in economics.
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Original: Grigory Martirosyan (born 14 November 1978) is a politician currently serving as the State Minister of the de facto independent Republic of Artsakh from 6 june 2018 until 28 may 2021.
Revised: Grigory Martirosyan (born 14 November 1978) is a politician currently serving as the State Minister of the de facto independent Republic of Artsakh from 6 June 2018 until 28 may 2021.
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Original: Grigory Martirosyan (born 14 November 1978) is a politician currently serving as the State Minister of the de facto independent Republic of Artsakh from 6 june 2018 until 28 may 2021.
Revised: Grigory Martirosyan (born 14 November 1978) is a politician currently serving as the State Minister of the de facto independent Republic of Artsakh from 6 june 2018 until 28 May 2021.
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Original: Jason Paul Laxamana (born September 21, 1987) is a Filipino writer, director and book author ,daughter’s name is Aliyah Laxamana .
Revised: Jason Paul Laxamana (born September 21, 1987) is a Filipino writer, director and book author .
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Original:  His film Astro Mayabang received a Special Mention and the Audience Choice Award at the 2010 Cinema One Originals Film Festival.
Revised:  His film , Astro Mayabang, received a Special Mention and the Audience Choice Award at the 2010 Cinema One Originals Film Festival.
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Original:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
Revised:  | 2018 So Connected The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
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Original:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
Revised:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's Bakwit Boys To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
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Original:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
Revised:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 Between Maybes Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
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Original:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
Revised:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
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Original:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
Revised:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
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Original:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 | He Who Is Without Sin ''
Revised:  | 2018 | So Connected | | | |- | The Day After Valentine's | | | |- | Bakwit Boys | | | |- | To Love Some Buddy | | | |- | rowspan="3" | 2019 | Between Maybes | | | |- | Just a Stranger | | | |- | Ang Henerasyong Sumuko Sa Love | | | |- | 2020 He Who Is Without Sin ''
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