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Original: Southern Ireland, as a political entity, was superseded by the Irish Free State on 6 December 1922 (which later became the fully independent state of the Ireland from 1937 with the adoption of its own constitution).
Revised: Southern Ireland, as a political entity, was superseded by the Irish Free State on 6 December 1922 (which later became the fully independent state of Ireland from 1937 with the adoption of its own constitution).
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Original:  They currently reside in Denver, Colorado, where Luke is employed as strength and conditioning coach for the Denver URL The couple has two children, son Luther (born 2003) and daughter Sunny (born 2005).
Revised:  They currently reside in Denver, Colorado, where Luke is employed as strength and conditioning coach for the Denver Broncos. The couple has two children, son Luther (born 2003) and daughter Sunny (born 2005).
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Original: The expression equates human impact on the environment (I) to the product of three factors: population (P), affluence (A) and technology (T).
Revised: The expression equates human impact on the environment to a function of three factors: population (P), affluence (A) and technology (T).
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Original:  The Cults of the Roman Empire. p44-47 As opposed to the Summer and Winter Solstices, the equinoxes occur on the day on which the sun and other stars appear in the sky not at their extremes of north declination, nor at south declination .
Revised:  The Cults of the Roman Empire. p44-47 As opposed to the Summer and Winter Solstices, the equinoxes occur on the day on which the sun appears in the sky not at their extremes of north declination, nor at south declination .
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Original:  The Cults of the Roman Empire. p44-47 As opposed to the Summer and Winter Solstices, the equinoxes occur on the day on which the sun and other stars appear in the sky not at their extremes of north declination, nor at south declination .
Revised:  The Cults of the Roman Empire. p44-47 As opposed to the Summer and Winter Solstices, the equinoxes occur on the day on which the sun and other stars appear in the sky not at it's extreme of north declination, nor at south declination .
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Original: File:Constellations ecliptic equirectangular plot.svg|The First Point of Aries defines the coordinate (0°, 0°).
Revised: File:Constellations ecliptic equirectangular plot.svg|The First Point of Aries defines the ecliptic coordinate of (0°, 0°).
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Original:  It is on the celestial equator at both the left and right extremes of the celestial chart, with the ecliptic (the orange dotted sine curve) passing through it.]] The First Point of Aries, also known as the Cusp of Aries, is the location of the vernal equinox, and is named for the constellation of Aries .
Revised:  It is on the celestial equator at both the left and right extremes of the sky chart, with the ecliptic (the orange dotted sine curve) passing through it.]] The First Point of Aries, also known as the Cusp of Aries, is the location of the vernal equinox, and is named for the constellation of Aries .
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Original:  It is one of the two points on the celestial sphere at which the celestial equator meets the eclipticplane , the other being the First Point of Libra, located exactly 180° from it.
Revised:  It is one of the two points on the celestial sphere at which the celestial equator crosses the ecliptic , the other being the First Point of Libra, located exactly 180° from it.
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Original:  Over its year-long journey through the constellations  , the Sun crosses the celestial equator from south to north at the First Point of Aries, and from north to south at the First Point of Libra.
Revised:  Over its year-long journey through the constellations , the Sun meets the celestial equator from south to north at the First Point of Aries, and from north to south at the First Point of Libra.
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Original:  The First Point of Aries is considered to be the celestial "prime meridian" from which right ascensions are calculated.
Revised:  The First Point of Aries is considered to be the celestial "prime meridian" from which right ascension is calculated.
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Original:  The Cults of the Roman Empire. p44-47 As opposed to the Summer and Winter Solstices, the equinoxes occur on the day on which the sun appears in the sky not at it's extreme of north declination, nor of south declination, but at the points where it crosses the celestial equator.
Revised:  The Cults of the Roman Empire. p44-47 As opposed to the Summer and Winter Solstices, the equinoxes occur on the day on which the sun appears in the sky not at its extreme of north declination, nor of south declination, but at the points where it crosses the celestial equator.
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Original:  The March equinox was chosen as the point to consider the position of the sun in the heavens rather than the northern hemisphere's autumnal equinox six months later as this was the day before a major festival , Hilaria, and marked the sowing or first growth/blossoming of trees and summer crops.
Revised:  At first glance any of the equinoxes or solstices might seemed to be likely candiates for marking the starting point of the sun in the heavens rather than the northern hemisphere's autumnal equinox six months later as this was the day before a major festival , Hilaria, and marked the sowing or first growth/blossoming of trees and summer crops.
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Original:  The March equinox was chosen as the point to consider the position of the sun in the heavens rather than the northern hemisphere's autumnal equinox six months later as this was the day before a major festival , Hilaria, and marked the sowing or first growth/blossoming of trees and summer crops.
Revised:  The March equinox was chosen as the point to consider the position of the sun in the starting point. This coincided with the festival of Hilaria, a time of optimism and beginnings where farmers began to sow or observed the first growth/blossoming of trees and summer crops.
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Original:  The Cults of the Roman Empire. p44-47 As opposed to the Summer and Winter Solstices, the equinoxes occur on the day on which the sun appears in the sky not at its extreme of north declination, nor of south declination, but at the points where it crosses the celestial equator.
Revised:  The Cults of the Roman Empire. p44-47 
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Original:  Due to precession of the equinoxes , currently, the position of the Sun on the March equinox is  in Pisces, while that on the September equinox is in Virgo (as of J2000).
Revised:  Due to precession of the equinoxes , currently, the position of the Sun on the March equinox is now in Pisces, while that on the September equinox is in Virgo (as of J2000).
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Original:  At first glance any of the equinoxes or solstices might seem to be likely candidates for marking the starting point of the sun's migration across celestial sphere  .
Revised:  The choice of starting position from which to measure the Sun's motion across celestial sphere .
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Original:  The equinoxes are preferred as an equinox marks the point in time when the sun has neither northern nor southern declination but is crossing the celestial equator.
Revised:  The equinoxes are preferred as an equinox marks the point in time when the Sun has neither northern nor southern declination but is crossing the celestial equator.
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Original:  This coincided with the festival of Hilaria, a time of optimism and beginnings where farmers began to sow or observed the first growth / blossoming of trees and summer crops.
Revised:  This coincided with the festival of Hilaria, a time of optimism and beginnings where farmers began to sow or observed the first growth and blossoming of trees and summer crops.
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Original:  Currently, the closest major star to the First Point of Aries is λ Piscium, located at (, ). The Sun now appears in Aries from late April through mid May , though the constellation is still associated with the beginning of the northern spring.
Revised:  The Sun now appears in Aries from late April through mid May , though the constellation is still associated with the beginning of the northern spring.
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Original:  Currently, the closest major star to the First Point of Aries is λ Piscium, located at (, ). The Sun now appears in Aries from late April through mid May , though the constellation is still associated with the beginning of the northern spring.
Revised:  Currently, the closest major star to the First Point of Aries is λ Piscium, located at (, ). The Sun now appears in Aries from late April until mid-May , though the constellation is still associated with the beginning of the northern spring.
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Original:  Due to the slow precession of the equinoxes, the Zenith view (above a location) of constellations at a time of year from a given location have slowly walked West (by using solar epochs the drift is known).
Revised:  Due to the slow precession of the equinoxes, the Zenith view (above a location) of constellations at a time of year from a given location have slowly moved west (by using solar epochs the drift is known).
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Original:  The tropical Zodiac is identically affected and no longer correspond with the constellations (the Cusp of Libra today is located within Virgo) , and is the basis for the concept of astrological ages .
Revised:  The tropical Zodiac is similarly affected and no longer correspond with the constellations (the Cusp of Libra today is located within Virgo) , and is the basis for the concept of astrological ages .
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Original:  The tropical Zodiac is identically affected and no longer correspond with the constellations (the Cusp of Libra today is located within Virgo) , and is the basis for the concept of astrological ages .
Revised:  The tropical Zodiac is identically affected and no longer corresponds with the constellations (the Cusp of Libra today is located within Virgo) , and is the basis for the concept of astrological ages .
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Original:  The tropical Zodiac is identically affected and no longer correspond with the constellations (the Cusp of Libra today is located within Virgo) , and is the basis for the concept of astrological ages .
Revised:  The tropical Zodiac is identically affected and no longer correspond with the constellations (the Cusp of Libra today is located within Virgo) .
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Original:  Some of his achievements included holding the first ever Welsh Parliament at Machynlleth and plans for two universities.
Revised:  Some of his achievements included holding the first Welsh Parliament at Machynlleth and plans for two universities.
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Original:  Evidence for a continuing Roman influence after the departure of the Roman legions is provided by an JBNCXSDEFGHJKI54YOUKGBJNVinscribed stone from Gwynedd dated between the late 5th and mid-6th centuries commemorating a certain Cantiorix who was described as a citizen (cives) of Gwynedd and a cousin of Maglos the magistrate (magistratus).
Revised:  Evidence for a continuing Roman influence after the departure of the Roman legions is provided by an inscribed stone from Gwynedd dated between the late 5th and mid-6th centuries commemorating a certain Cantiorix who was described as a citizen (cives) of Gwynedd and a cousin of Maglos the magistrate (magistratus).
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Original:  Climate change , such as altered weather-patterns (including droughts or floods), deforestation, increased water pollution and wasteful use of water can also cause insufficient water supply.
Revised:  Climate change (including droughts or floods), deforestation, increased water pollution and wasteful use of water can also cause insufficient water supply.
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Original: West Africa and North Africa Water scarcity in Yemen ( Yemen is neither in north africa or west africa) ( see: Water supply and sanitation in Yemen) is a growing problem that has resulted from population growth, poor water management, climate change, shifts in rainfall, water infrastructure deterioration, poor governance, and other anthropogenic effects.
Revised: West Africa and North Africa Water scarcity in Yemen ( see: Water supply and sanitation in Yemen) is a growing problem that has resulted from population growth, poor water management, climate change, shifts in rainfall, water infrastructure deterioration, poor governance, and other anthropogenic effects.
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Original: At an early point in his intellectual and political life, Erasmus begins to highlight the importance of de-colonization and how this must be based on collective action.
Revised: At an early point in his intellectual and political life, Erasmus began to highlight the importance of de-colonization and how this must be based on collective action.
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Original:  In taking this approach he attempts to highlight the collective capacity of resistance, and challenges the power relations embedded within the language and practice of paternalism, asserting his people’s right to define themselves, and their own needs.
Revised:  In taking this approach he attempted to highlight the collective capacity of resistance, and challenges the power relations embedded within the language and practice of paternalism, asserting his people’s right to define themselves, and their own needs.
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Original:  In taking this approach he attempts to highlight the collective capacity of resistance, and challenges the power relations embedded within the language and practice of paternalism, asserting his people’s right to define themselves, and their own needs.
Revised:  In taking this approach he attempts to highlight the collective capacity of resistance, and challenged the power relations embedded within the language and practice of paternalism, asserting his people’s right to define themselves, and their own needs.
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Original:  This is carried on throughout his public interviews and is presented in the RCAP.
Revised:  This was carried on throughout his public interviews and is presented in the RCAP.
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Original:  In a speech given by Erasmus in 2002, he continues to call for conversation “nation to nation,” as the means upon which to build a “common future”.
Revised:  In a speech given by Erasmus in 2002, he continued to call for conversation “nation to nation,” as the means upon which to build a “common future”.
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Original:  Importantly, Erasmus proposes that the contemporary focus should move from an emphasis on “Aboriginal Rights to relationship between peoples;
Revised:  Importantly, Erasmus proposed that the contemporary focus should move from an emphasis on “Aboriginal Rights to relationship between peoples;
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Original:  It can be held to the body by means of draping, knotting, fixing with pins ,  fibulae, clasps, sashes or belts, tying , or friction and gravity alone.
Revised:  It can be held to the body by means of knotting , fibulae, clasps, sashes or belts, tying , or friction and gravity alone.
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Original:  It can be held to the body by means of draping, knotting, fixing with pins ,  fibulae, clasps, sashes or belts, tying , or friction and gravity alone.
Revised:  It can be held to the body by means of draping, knotting, fixing with pins , pinning, fibulae, clasps, sashes or belts, tying , or friction and gravity alone.
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Original:  It can be held to the body by means of draping, knotting, fixing with pins ,  fibulae, clasps, sashes or belts, tying , or friction and gravity alone.
Revised:  It can be held to the body by means of draping, knotting, fixing with pins , fibulae, clasps, sashes , belts, tying , or friction and gravity alone.
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Original:  History Draping is a most ancient and widespread form of clothing.
Revised: An advanced form of garment is the tailored dress, which is constructed from fabric that has been cut into pieces and stitched together to fit various parts of the body. In comparison to draped dresses, they are more fitted to the body. History Draping is a most ancient and widespread form of clothing.
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Original: An advanced form of  garment is the tailored dress, which is constructed from fabric that has been cut into pieces and stitched together to fit various parts of the body.
Revised: An advanced form of the garment is the tailored dress, which is constructed from fabric that has been cut into pieces and stitched together to fit various parts of the body.
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Original: They contrast extelligence with intelligence ( by which they mean the knowledge and cognitive processes within the brain ) . Further, they regard the ‘complicity’ of extelligence and intelligence as fundamental to the development of consciousness in both evolutionary terms for  the species, and also for the individual.
Revised: They contrast extelligence with intelligence , by which they mean the knowledge and cognitive processes within the brain ) . Further, they regard the ‘complicity’ of extelligence and intelligence as fundamental to the development of consciousness in both evolutionary terms for the species, and also for the individual.
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Original: They contrast extelligence with intelligence ( by which they mean the knowledge and cognitive processes within the brain ) . Further, they regard the ‘complicity’ of extelligence and intelligence as fundamental to the development of consciousness in both evolutionary terms for  the species, and also for the individual.
Revised: They contrast extelligence with intelligence ( by which they mean the knowledge and cognitive processes within the brain . Further, they regard the ‘complicity’ of extelligence and intelligence as fundamental to the development of consciousness in both evolutionary terms for the species, and also for the individual.
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Original: They contrast extelligence with intelligence ( by which they mean the knowledge and cognitive processes within the brain ) . Further, they regard the ‘complicity’ of extelligence and intelligence as fundamental to the development of consciousness in both evolutionary terms for  the species, and also for the individual.
Revised: They contrast extelligence with intelligence ( by which they mean the knowledge and cognitive processes within the brain ) . Further, they regard the ‘complicity’ of extelligence and intelligence as fundamental to the development of consciousness in evolutionary terms for the species, and also for the individual.
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Original: They contrast extelligence with intelligence ( by which they mean the knowledge and cognitive processes within the brain ) . Further, they regard the ‘complicity’ of extelligence and intelligence as fundamental to the development of consciousness in both evolutionary terms for  the species, and also for the individual.
Revised: They contrast extelligence with intelligence ( by which they mean the knowledge and cognitive processes within the brain ) . Further, they regard the ‘complicity’ of extelligence and intelligence as fundamental to the development of consciousness in both evolutionary terms for the individual.
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Original:  ‘Complicity’ is a composite of complexity and simplicity  and Cohen and Stewart use it to express the close and interdependent relationship between knowledge-inside-ones-head and knowledge-outside-ones-head that one can readily access.
Revised:  ‘Complicity’ is a composite of complexity and simplicity , and Cohen and Stewart use it to express the close and interdependent relationship between knowledge-inside-ones-head and knowledge-outside-ones-head that one can readily access.
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Original:  ‘Complicity’ is a composite of complexity and simplicity  and Cohen and Stewart use it to express the close and interdependent relationship between knowledge-inside-ones-head and knowledge-outside-ones-head that one can readily access.
Revised:  ‘Complicity’ is a composite of complexity and simplicity and Cohen and Stewart use it to express the close and interdependent relationship between knowledge-inside-ones-head and knowledge-outside-ones-head which one can readily access.
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Original:  Although Cohen's and Stewart's individual disciplines are biology and mathematics, respectively, their description of the complicity of intelligence and extelligence is firmly in the tradition of Jean Piaget, Belinda Dewar and David A. Kolb.
Revised:  Although Cohen's and Stewart's respective disciplines are biology and mathematics, respectively, their description of the complicity of intelligence and extelligence is firmly in the tradition of Jean Piaget, Belinda Dewar and David A. Kolb.
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Original:  Although Cohen's and Stewart's individual disciplines are biology and mathematics, respectively, their description of the complicity of intelligence and extelligence is firmly in the tradition of Jean Piaget, Belinda Dewar and David A. Kolb.
Revised:  Although Cohen's and Stewart's individual disciplines are biology and mathematics, their description of the complicity of intelligence and extelligence is firmly in the tradition of Jean Piaget, Belinda Dewar and David A. Kolb.
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Original:  One of the key contributions of Cohen and Stewart is the way they relate ( through the idea of complicity ) the individual to the pooled sum of human knowledge.
Revised:  One of the key contributions of Cohen and Stewart is the way they relate , through the idea of complicity ) the individual to the pooled sum of human knowledge.
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Original:  One of the key contributions of Cohen and Stewart is the way they relate ( through the idea of complicity ) the individual to the pooled sum of human knowledge.
Revised:  One of the key contributions of Cohen and Stewart is the way they relate ( through the idea of complicity , the individual to the pooled sum of human knowledge.
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Original:  From the mathematics of complexity and game theory  they use the idea of phase space and talk about extelligence space.
Revised:  From the mathematics of complexity and game theory , they use the idea of phase space and talk about extelligence space.
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Original:  In other words, there has to be ( at some level ) an appreciation of what is out there and what it means.
Revised:  In other words, there has to be , at some level ) an appreciation of what is out there and what it means.
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Original:  In other words, there has to be ( at some level ) an appreciation of what is out there and what it means.
Revised:  In other words, there has to be ( at some level , an appreciation of what is out there and what it means.
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Original:  ‘Complicity’ is a composite of complexity and simplicity, and Cohen and Stewart use it to express the close and interdependent relationship between knowledge-inside-ones-head and knowledge-outside-ones-head which one can readily access.
Revised:  ‘Complicity’ is a composite of complexity and simplicity, and Cohen and Stewart use it to express the close and interdependent relationship between knowledge-inside-one's-head and knowledge-outside-one's-head which one can readily access.
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Original:  There is a total phase space ( extelligence space) for the human race, which consists of everything that could be known and represented.
Revised:  There is a total phase space ( intelligence space) for the human race, which consists of everything that could be known and represented.
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Original:  It is defined in the book as all of the cultural capital that is available to us in the form of  tribal legends, folklore, nursery rhymes, books, videotapes, CD-ROMs, etc.
Revised:  It is defined in the book as all of the cultural capital that is available to us in the form of extermal media (e.g. tribal legends, folklore, nursery rhymes, books, videotapes, CD-ROMs, etc.
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