wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  In a later post, Jannes said that he had been feeling suicidal for about six months, but was too scared to actually try anything until he tried to strangle himself with his own hands.
Revised:  In a later post, Jannes said that he had been feeling suicidal for about six months, but was too scared to actually attempt anything until he tried to strangle himself with his own hands.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Broadcast of suicide A short while later, at 1:06 p.m., Jannus posted the FTP server url and login details, saying that he needed to hurry up because, "I'm beginning to feel that I might change my mind."
Revised:  Broadcast of suicide A short while later, at 1:06 p.m., Jannus posted the FTP server URL and login details, saying that he needed to hurry up because, "I'm beginning to feel that I might change my mind."
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Broadcast of suicide A short while later, at 1:06 p.m., Jannus posted the FTP server url and login details, saying that he needed to hurry up because, "I'm beginning to feel that I might change my mind."
Revised:  Broadcast of suicide A short while later, at 1:06 p.m., Jannus posted the FTP server url and login details, and stated that he needed to hurry up because, "I'm beginning to feel that I might change my mind."
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  At this point, people who logged on to the server found  still images taken every two seconds, showing a young man dressed in sweatpants and t-shirt, in his apartment, hanging network cable from a doorway.
Revised:  At this point, people who logged on to the server found a series of still images taken every two seconds, showing a young man dressed in sweatpants and t-shirt, in his apartment, hanging network cable from a doorway.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  "Alright, let's do it . "  The next series of images show him walking back to the cable and hooking it around his neck.
Revised:  "Alright, let's do it , " The next series of images show him walking back to the cable and hooking it around his neck.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "Alright, let's do it . "  The next series of images show him walking back to the cable and hooking it around his neck.
Revised:  "Alright, let's do it . " he said. The next series of images show him walking back to the cable and hooking it around his neck.
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Original:  He slumps to the floor, and his body began shaking while his head and arms began turning dark purple before he stops moving.
Revised:  He slumps to the floor, and his body begins shaking while his head and arms began turning dark purple before he stops moving.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He slumps to the floor, and his body began shaking while his head and arms began turning dark purple before he stops moving.
Revised:  He slumps to the floor, and his body began shaking while his head and arms turn dark purple until he stops moving.
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Original:  On the messageboard , people start to realise the seriousness of the events: "Given the last pictures, it looks like [this was serious]", "holy crap, he has done it already", "okay it's getting nasty  , " "This is quite sick.
Revised:  On the message board , people start to realise the seriousness of the events: "Given the last pictures, it looks like [this was serious]", "holy crap, he has done it already", "okay it's getting nasty , " "This is quite sick.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  On the messageboard , people start to realise the seriousness of the events: "Given the last pictures, it looks like [this was serious]", "holy crap, he has done it already", "okay it's getting nasty  , " "This is quite sick.
Revised:  On the messageboard , people start to realize the seriousness of the events: "Given the last pictures, it looks like [this was serious]", "holy crap, he has done it already", "okay it's getting nasty , " "This is quite sick.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  On the messageboard , people start to realise the seriousness of the events: "Given the last pictures, it looks like [this was serious]", "holy crap, he has done it already", "okay it's getting nasty  , " "This is quite sick.
Revised:  On the messageboard , people start to realise the seriousness of the events: "Given the last pictures, it looks like [this was serious]", "holy crap, he has done it already", "okay it's getting nasty " , " "This is quite sick.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  On the messageboard , people start to realise the seriousness of the events: "Given the last pictures, it looks like [this was serious]", "holy crap, he has done it already", "okay it's getting nasty  , " "This is quite sick.
Revised:  On the messageboard , people start to realise the seriousness of the events: "Given the last pictures, it looks like [this was serious]", "holy crap, he has done it already", "okay it's getting nasty , " this is quite sick.
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Original:  Not okay at all," and "I've seen a lot online but this is the worst I've seen in my entire life" were some of the comments  .
Revised:  Not okay at all," and "I've seen a lot online but this is the worst I've seen in my entire life" were some of the comments posted .
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Original:  The Södertälje police say they were first alerted to the incident at 1:44 p.m.
Revised:  The Södertälje police state that they were first alerted to the incident at 1:44 p.m.
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Original:  They begin administering CPR , Two minutes later, two paramedics also arrive, and  take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables , the back of a flat-screen television set , and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
Revised:  They begin administering CPR . Two minutes later, two paramedics also arrive, and take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables , the back of a flat-screen television set , and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  They begin administering CPR , Two minutes later, two paramedics also arrive, and  take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables , the back of a flat-screen television set , and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
Revised:  They begin administering CPR , Two minutes later, two paramedics arrive, and take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables , the back of a flat-screen television set , and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  They begin administering CPR , Two minutes later, two paramedics also arrive, and  take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables , the back of a flat-screen television set , and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
Revised:  They begin administering CPR , Two minutes later, two paramedics also arrive, and they take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables , the back of a flat-screen television set , and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  They begin administering CPR , Two minutes later, two paramedics also arrive, and  take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables , the back of a flat-screen television set , and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
Revised:  They begin administering CPR , Two minutes later, two paramedics also arrive, and take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables ; the back of a flat-screen television set , and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  They begin administering CPR , Two minutes later, two paramedics also arrive, and  take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables , the back of a flat-screen television set , and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
Revised:  They begin administering CPR , Two minutes later, two paramedics also arrive, and take over CPR while one of the officers looks around the room at cables , the back of a flat-screen television set ; and presumably the computer, as the images finally stop being uploaded.
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Original:  The forum has been investigated by the Swedish police on numerous occasions and is under constant surveillance by the Swedish Security Service due to its members' abundant discussions about drug use, child pornography, race science, bestiality and other controversial subjects.
Revised:  The site has been investigated by the Swedish police on numerous occasions and is under constant surveillance by the Swedish Security Service due to its members' abundant discussions about drug use, child pornography, race science, bestiality and other controversial subjects.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Central European Summer Time (0951 UTC), Marcus Jannes, a student from Järna, Stockholm, posted to the Mental Health Problems forum of Sweden's Flashback message boards using the newly-registered username "LurifaxFlux", stating that he was going to hang himself, adding that he had already swallowing 100mg of dexofen and 1500mg of paracetamol.
Revised:  Central European Summer Time (0951 UTC), Marcus Jannes, a student from Järna, Stockholm, posted to the Mental Health Problems forum of Sweden's Flashback message boards using the newly-registered username "LurifaxFlux", stating that he was going to hang himself, adding that he had already swallowed 100mg of dexofen and 1500mg of paracetamol.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Broadcast of suicide A short while later , at 1:06 p.m., Jannus posted the FTP server URL and login details, and stated that he needed to hurry up because, "I'm beginning to feel that I might change my mind."
Revised: Broadcast of suicide A short while laters , at 1:06 p.m., Jannus posted the FTP server URL and login details, and stated that he needed to hurry up because, "I'm beginning to feel that I might change my mind."
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Broadcast of suicide A short while laters , at 1:06 p.m., Jannus posted the FTP server URL and login details, and stated that he needed to hurry up because, "I'm beginning to feel that I might change my mind."
Revised: Broadcast of suicide A short while later , at 1:06 p.m., Jannus posted the FTP server URL and login details, and stated that he needed to hurry up because, "I'm beginning to feel that I might change my mind."
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  This caused that the pilot fought that the plane needed less fule that it did and a smaller refuel than needed was made in the airport of Bari.
Revised:  This caused that the pilot fought that the plane needed less fuel that it did and a smaller refuel than needed was made in the airport of Bari.
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Original: The investigation about the crash into sea of a Tunisian airplane ATR-72 near Sicily on August 6, 2005 arrived to a astonishing conclusion.
Revised: Investigation of the crash into sea of a Tunisian airplane ATR-72 near Sicily on August 6, 2005 arrived to a astonishing conclusion.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: The investigation about the crash into sea of a Tunisian airplane ATR-72 near Sicily on August 6, 2005 arrived to a astonishing conclusion.
Revised: The investigation about the crash into sea of a Tunisian airplane ATR-72 near Sicily on August 6, 2005 has arrived at an astonishing conclusion.
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Original:  On the plane there was a wrong type of a fuel gauge (that is the gauge was the one of another type of aircraft, the ATR-42 ) .
Revised:  The wrong type of a fuel gauge (that is the gauge was the one of another type of aircraft, the ATR-42 ) .
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  On the plane there was a wrong type of a fuel gauge (that is the gauge was the one of another type of aircraft, the ATR-42 ) .
Revised:  On the plane there was a wrong type of a fuel gauge was installed in the aircraft. The gauge was designed for another type of aircraft, the ATR-42 ) .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  On the plane there was a wrong type of a fuel gauge (that is the gauge was the one of another type of aircraft, the ATR-42 ) .
Revised:  On the plane there was a wrong type of a fuel gauge (that is the gauge was the one of another type of aircraft, the ATR-42 .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  This caused that the pilot fought that the plane needed less fuel that it did and a smaller refuel than needed was made in the airport of Bari.
Revised:  This caused that the pilot fought that the plane needed less fuel that it did and less fuel than needed was made in the airport of Bari.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  This caused that the pilot fought that the plane needed less fuel that it did and a smaller refuel than needed was made in the airport of Bari.
Revised:  This caused that the pilot fought that the plane needed less fuel that it did and a smaller refuel than needed was loaded in the airport of Bari.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  WHile on flight the airplane went out of fuel, but the pilot did not realized that becouse of wrong fuel indication on the gauge .
Revised:  While in flight the airplane went out of fuel, but the pilot did not realized that becouse of wrong fuel indication on the gauge .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  WHile on flight the airplane went out of fuel, but the pilot did not realized that becouse of wrong fuel indication on the gauge .
Revised:  WHile on flight the airplane ran of fuel, but the pilot did not realized that becouse of wrong fuel indication on the gauge .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  WHile on flight the airplane went out of fuel, but the pilot did not realized that becouse of wrong fuel indication on the gauge .
Revised:  WHile on flight the airplane went out of fuel, despite the gauge showing fuel was still available .
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Original:  After this conclusion by the Italian National Security Flight Agency (ANSV) the Italian National Agency for Civil Aviation (ENAC) has suspended the authorization to operated commercial flight in Italyto Tuninter, the Tunisian airline that owned the airplaned .
Revised:  After this conclusion by the Italian National Security Flight Agency (ANSV) the Italian National Agency for Civil Aviation (ENAC) has suspended Tunisian airline Tuninter's authorization to operate commercial flights in Italy .
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Original:  A warning was also send to European Authority about what has happended asking that all the fuel gauges installed on ATR-42 amd ATR-72 to be checkedto be the correct version .
Revised:  A warning was also send to European Authority about what has happened asking that all the fuel gauges installed on ATR-42 amd ATR-72 to be checkedto be the correct version .
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Original:  A warning was also send to European Authority about what has happended asking that all the fuel gauges installed on ATR-42 amd ATR-72 to be checkedto be the correct version .
Revised:  A warning was also send to European Authority about what has happended asking that all fuel gauges installed on ATR-42 amd ATR-72 to be checkedto be the correct version .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  A warning was also send to European Authority about what has happended asking that all the fuel gauges installed on ATR-42 amd ATR-72 to be checkedto be the correct version .
Revised:  A warning was also send to European Authority about what has happended asking that all the fuel gauges installed on ATR-42 amd ATR-72 be checked .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The wrong type of a fuel gauge was installed in the aircraft.
Revised:  The wrong type of fuel gauge was installed in the aircraft.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The level indicated by the gauge was wrong, causing the pilot to think that the plane needed less fuel that it did and less fuel than  needed was loaded in the airport of Bari.
Revised:  The level indicated by the gauge was wrong, causing the pilot to think that the plane needed less fuel that it did . Then, when fueling at the airport, less fuel than needed was loaded in the airport of Bari.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The level indicated by the gauge was wrong, causing the pilot to think that the plane needed less fuel that it did and less fuel than  needed was loaded in the airport of Bari.
Revised:  The level indicated by the gauge was wrong, causing the pilot to think that the plane needed less fuel that it did and less fuel than was needed was loaded in the airport of Bari.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  While in flight the airplane ran  of fuel, despite the gauge showing fuel was still available.
Revised:  While in flight the airplane ran out of fuel, despite the gauge showing fuel was still available.
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Original:  While in flight the airplane ran  of fuel, despite the gauge showing fuel was still available.
Revised:  While in flight the airplane ran of fuel, although the gauge still showed fuel available.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Image:ATR-42.jpg||A smaller ATR-42, designed to carry 40-50 passengers.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: US Texas Commissioner of Agriculture,  Todd Staples visited Orr Elementary in Tyler, Texas on Wednesday to kick off National School Lunch week for the state.
Revised: US Texas Commissioner of Agriculture, w: Todd Staples visited Orr Elementary in Tyler, Texas on Wednesday to kick off National School Lunch week for the state.
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Original: US Texas Commissioner of Agriculture, w: Todd Staples visited Orr Elementary in Tyler, Texas on Wednesday to kick off National School Lunch week for the state.
Revised: US Texas Commissioner of Agriculture, Todd Staples visited Orr Elementary in Tyler, Texas on Wednesday to kick off National School Lunch week for the state.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He stated, "During the old days, the Three R's in school meant 'Reading, 'Writing and 'Arithmetic' ... but I want you students to remember the three E's: Education, Exercise and Eating right . "  The Commissioner asked students a variety of questions about state trivia such as the names of the state bird, the state tree and the state fruit.
Revised:  "During the old days, the Three R's in school meant 'Reading, 'Writing and 'Arithmetic' ... but I want you students to remember the three E's: Education, Exercise and Eating right . " The Commissioner asked students a variety of questions about state trivia such as the names of the state bird, the state tree and the state fruit.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  He stated, "During the old days, the Three R's in school meant 'Reading, 'Writing and 'Arithmetic' ... but I want you students to remember the three E's: Education, Exercise and Eating right . "  The Commissioner asked students a variety of questions about state trivia such as the names of the state bird, the state tree and the state fruit.
Revised:  He stated, "During the old days, the Three R's in school meant 'Reading, 'Writing and 'Arithmetic' ... but I want you students to remember the three E's: Education, Exercise and Eating right , " The Commissioner asked students a variety of questions about state trivia such as the names of the state bird, the state tree and the state fruit.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He stated, "During the old days, the Three R's in school meant 'Reading, 'Writing and 'Arithmetic' ... but I want you students to remember the three E's: Education, Exercise and Eating right . "  The Commissioner asked students a variety of questions about state trivia such as the names of the state bird, the state tree and the state fruit.
Revised:  He stated, "During the old days, the Three R's in school meant 'Reading, 'Writing and 'Arithmetic' ... but I want you students to remember the three E's: Education, Exercise and Eating right . " he stated. The Commissioner asked students a variety of questions about state trivia such as the names of the state bird, the state tree and the state fruit.
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Original:  Estimates indicate that this issue alone can cost this county 1 billion dollars in healthcare costs per year in the future."
Revised:  Estimates indicate that this issue alone can cost this county one-billion dollars in healthcare costs per year in the future."
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Original:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . "  National School Lunch Week runs  October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th  National School Lunch Week
Revised:  "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . " National School Lunch Week runs October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th National School Lunch Week
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Original:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . "  National School Lunch Week runs  October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th  National School Lunch Week
Revised:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge , " National School Lunch Week runs October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th National School Lunch Week
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Original:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . "  National School Lunch Week runs  October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th  National School Lunch Week
Revised:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . " the Commisioner further stated. National School Lunch Week runs October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th National School Lunch Week
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . "  National School Lunch Week runs  October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th  National School Lunch Week
Revised:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . " National School Lunch Week runs from October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th National School Lunch Week
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . "  National School Lunch Week runs  October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th  National School Lunch Week
Revised:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . " National School Lunch Week runs October 11th –15th. President Barack Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th National School Lunch Week
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Original:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . "  National School Lunch Week runs  October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th  National School Lunch Week
Revised:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . " National School Lunch Week runs October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th – 15th National School Lunch Week
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . "  National School Lunch Week runs  October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th  National School Lunch Week
Revised:  The Commissioner further stated, "I applaud the city of Tyler for taking the Fit City challenge . " National School Lunch Week runs October 11th - 15. President Obama issued a presidential proclamation naming October 11th - 15th the National School Lunch Week
Edit intent: clarity