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Original: A shooting stick is a combined walking stick and folding chair.shooting stick at Cambridge Dictionaries Online  A traditional British shooting stick is a wooden or metal shaft terminating at the base in a plate foot, with a bifurcated handle at top that folds out to form a  seat.
Revised: A shooting stick is a combined walking stick and folding chair.shooting stick at Cambridge Dictionaries Online A traditional British shooting stick is a wooden or metal shaft terminating at the base in a plate foot, with a bifurcated handle at top that folds out to form a simple seat.
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Original:  firm opposition to his regime started after the it was evident that the President was incapable of leading the recovery efforts.
Revised:  firm opposition to his regime started after it became evident that the President was incapable of leading the recovery efforts.
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Original:  he wrote a tale called The political beggars – , which eventually became his most famous novel: El Señor Presidente.
Revised:  he wrote a tale called The political beggars () , which eventually became his most famous novel: El Señor Presidente.
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Original: Nonhuman females Contrary to the positive effects of oxytocin on maternal behavior, heightened levels of cortisol postpartum has been linked to a decrease in maternal care in nonhuman species, including the Western lowland gorilla, baboons, Japanese macaques, and rhesus macaques.
Revised: Nonhuman females Contrary to the positive effects of oxytocin on maternal behavior, heightened levels of cortisol postpartum has been linked to a decrease in maternal care in nonhuman species, including the western lowland gorilla, baboons, Japanese macaques, and rhesus macaques.
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Original: One study examined the effects that intranasal oxytocin spray administration has in relation to individuals ’ childhood experiences of punishment by maternal love withdrawal.
Revised: One study examined the effects that intranasal oxytocin spray administration has in relation to individuals ' childhood experiences of punishment by maternal love withdrawal.
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Original:  A commonly mentioned hormone in parenting is oxytocin, however many other hormones relay key information that results in variations in behavior.
Revised:  A commonly mentioned hormone in parenting is oxytocin, n behavior.
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Original:  A commonly mentioned hormone in parenting is oxytocin, n behavior.
Revised:  A commonly mentioned hormone in parenting is oxytocin, however many other hormones relay key information that results in variations in behavior.
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Original:  These include estrogen, progesterone, prolactin, cortisol, and testosm hormones are not necessary for the expression of maternal behavior, they may influence it.
Revised:  These include estrogen, progesterone, prolactin, cortisol, and testosterone. While hormones are not necessary for the expression of maternal behavior, they may influence it.
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Original: Executed largely under the direction of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection  and its Secretary from 2012 to 2017 Wang Qishan along with corresponding military and judicial organs, the campaign was notable in implicating both incumbent and former national-level leaders, including former Politburo Standing Committee (PSC) member Zhou Yongkang and former Central Military Commission (CMC) vice-chairmen Xu Caihou and Guo Boxiong.
Revised: Executed largely under the direction of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection (CCDI) and its Secretary from 2012 to 2017 Wang Qishan along with corresponding military and judicial organs, the campaign was notable in implicating both incumbent and former national-level leaders, including former Politburo Standing Committee (PSC) member Zhou Yongkang and former Central Military Commission (CMC) vice-chairmen Xu Caihou and Guo Boxiong.
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Original:  The agency directly charged with overseeing the campaign is the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection (CCDI) , which, at the time of the campaign, was headed by Secretary Wang Qishan, a politician known for his work in the financial sector and one of the seven members of the Politburo Standing Committee of the CCP.
Revised:  The agency directly charged with overseeing the campaign is the CCDI , which, at the time of the campaign, was headed by Secretary Wang Qishan, a politician known for his work in the financial sector and one of the seven members of the Politburo Standing Committee of the CCP.
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Original:  Its plot revolves around a prosecutor's efforts to unearth corruption in a fictional Chinese city .
Revised:  Its plot revolves around a prosecutor's efforts to unearth corruption in a fictional Chinese city 
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Xi Jinping's anti-graft campaign on South China Morning Post Category:Chinese Communist Party Category:History of the People's Republic of China Category:Socialism in China Category:2010s in China Category:Campaigns of the Chinese Communist Party Category:Corruption in Chi
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Xi Jinping's anti-graft campaign on South China Morning Post Category:Chinese Communist Party Category:History of the People's Republic of China Category:Socialism in China Category:2010s in China Category:Campaigns of the Chinese Communist Party Category:Corruption in Chi
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Xi Jinping's anti-graft campaign on South China Morning Post Category:Chinese Communist Party Category:History of the People's Republic of China Category:Socialism in China Category:2010s in China Category:Campaigns of the Chinese Communist Party Category:Corruption in Chi
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Chinese Communist Party Category:History of the People's Republic of China Category:Socialism in China Category:2010s in China Category:Campaigns of the Chinese Communist Party Category:Corruption in Chi
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Xi Jinping's anti-graft campaign on South China Morning Post Category:Chinese Communist Party Category:History of the People's Republic of China Category:Socialism in China Category:2010s in China Category:Campaigns of the Chinese Communist Party Category:Corruption in Chi
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Xi Jinping's anti-graft campaign on South China Morning Post 
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Original: A far-reaching campaign against corruption began in China following the conclusion of the 18th National Congress of the Chinese Communist Party ( CCP ) in 2012.
Revised: A far-reaching campaign against corruption began in China following the conclusion of the 18th National Congress of the Chinese Communist Party ( CPC ) in 2012.
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Original:  The agency directly charged with overseeing the campaign is the CCDI, which, at the time of the campaign, was headed by Secretary Wang Qishan, a politician known for his work in the financial sector and one of the seven members of the Politburo Standing Committee of the CCP . Wang was in charge of the day-to-day execution of the campaign.
Revised:  The agency directly charged with overseeing the campaign is the CCDI, which, at the time of the campaign, was headed by Secretary Wang Qishan, a politician known for his work in the financial sector and one of the seven members of the Politburo Standing Committee of the CPC . Wang was in charge of the day-to-day execution of the campaign.
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Original:  The power of anticorruption is centralized to the CCP Politburo Standing Committee by undermining the original functions of the local Discipline Inspection Commissions.
Revised:  The power of anticorruption is centralized to the CPC Politburo Standing Committee by undermining the original functions of the local Discipline Inspection Commissions.
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Original:  First regional inspections The first salvos of the campaign was the abrupt sacking of Sichuan Deputy Party Secretary Li Chuncheng, which took place in December 2012, shortly after Xi took office as leader of the CCP .
Revised:  First regional inspections The first salvos of the campaign was the abrupt sacking of Sichuan Deputy Party Secretary Li Chuncheng, which took place in December 2012, shortly after Xi took office as leader of the CPC .
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Original:  Chinese writer Murong Xuecun, a continual critic of the CCP , wrote in an opinion article "In my view, Xi's anti-corruption campaign looks more like a Stalinist political purge... he relies on the regulations of the party and not on the laws of the state, the people carrying it out operate like the KGB, and most cases cannot be reported on with any transparency."
Revised:  Chinese writer Murong Xuecun, a continual critic of the CPC , wrote in an opinion article "In my view, Xi's anti-corruption campaign looks more like a Stalinist political purge... he relies on the regulations of the party and not on the laws of the state, the people carrying it out operate like the KGB, and most cases cannot be reported on with any transparency."
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Original:  Duowei wrote that the campaign is part of a wider agenda of systemic reform aimed at restoring legitimacy of the CCP 's mandate to rule, which – in the decades immediately prior – was heavily challenged by widespread corruption, a widening gap between rich and poor, social injustice, and excessive focus on material wealth.
Revised:  Duowei wrote that the campaign is part of a wider agenda of systemic reform aimed at restoring legitimacy of the CPC 's mandate to rule, which – in the decades immediately prior – was heavily challenged by widespread corruption, a widening gap between rich and poor, social injustice, and excessive focus on material wealth.
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Original:  Li believes that not only has Xi's campaign had the effect of truly curbing corrupt practices at all levels of government, it has also restored public confidence in the CCP 's mandate to rule, and has also returned massive ill-gotten gains back into state coffers which could be re-directed towards economic development.
Revised:  Li believes that not only has Xi's campaign had the effect of truly curbing corrupt practices at all levels of government, it has also restored public confidence in the CPC 's mandate to rule, and has also returned massive ill-gotten gains back into state coffers which could be re-directed towards economic development.
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Original:  Counterintelligence rationale A December 2020 article in Foreign Policy suggested that decades of corruption inside of the CCP had created vulnerabilities exploited by outside intelligence agencies, particularly the Central Intelligence Agency.
Revised:  Counterintelligence rationale A December 2020 article in Foreign Policy suggested that decades of corruption inside of the CPC had created vulnerabilities exploited by outside intelligence agencies, particularly the Central Intelligence Agency.
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Original: A far-reaching campaign against corruption began in China following the conclusion of the 18th National Congress of the Chinese Communist Party ( CPC ) in 2012.
Revised: A far-reaching campaign against corruption began in China following the conclusion of the 18th National Congress of the Chinese Communist Party ( CCP ) in 2012.
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Original:  The campaign, carried out under the aegis of Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the Chinese Communist Party, was the largest organized anti-graft effort in the history of Communist rule in China.
Revised:  The campaign, carried out under the aegis of Xi Jinping, General Secretary of the Chinese Communist Party, was the largest organized anti-graft effort in the history of CCP rule in China.
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Original:  The agency directly charged with overseeing the campaign is the CCDI, which, at the time of the campaign, was headed by Secretary Wang Qishan, a politician known for his work in the financial sector and one of the seven members of the  Politburo Standing Committee of the CPC . Wang was in charge of the day-to-day execution of the campaign.
Revised:  The agency directly charged with overseeing the campaign is the CCDI, which, at the time of the campaign, was headed by Secretary Wang Qishan, a politician known for his work in the financial sector and one of the seven members of the CCP Politburo Standing Committee of the CPC . Wang was in charge of the day-to-day execution of the campaign.
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Original:  The agency directly charged with overseeing the campaign is the CCDI, which, at the time of the campaign, was headed by Secretary Wang Qishan, a politician known for his work in the financial sector and one of the seven members of the  Politburo Standing Committee of the CPC . Wang was in charge of the day-to-day execution of the campaign.
Revised:  The agency directly charged with overseeing the campaign is the CCDI, which, at the time of the campaign, was headed by Secretary Wang Qishan, a politician known for his work in the financial sector and one of the seven members of the Politburo Standing Committee . Wang was in charge of the day-to-day execution of the campaign.
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Original:  The power of anticorruption is centralized to the CPC Politburo Standing Committee by undermining the original functions of the local Discipline Inspection Commissions.
Revised:  The power of anticorruption is centralized to the CCP Politburo Standing Committee by undermining the original functions of the local Discipline Inspection Commissions.
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Original:  First regional inspections The first salvos of the campaign was the abrupt sacking of Sichuan Deputy Party Secretary Li Chuncheng, which took place in December 2012, shortly after Xi took office as leader of the CPC .
Revised:  First regional inspections The first salvos of the campaign was the abrupt sacking of Sichuan Deputy Party Secretary Li Chuncheng, which took place in December 2012, shortly after Xi took office as leader of the CCP .
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Original:  Chinese writer Murong Xuecun, a continual critic of the CPC , wrote in an opinion article "In my view, Xi's anti-corruption campaign looks more like a Stalinist political purge... he relies on the regulations of the party and not on the laws of the state, the people carrying it out operate like the KGB, and most cases cannot be reported on with any transparency."
Revised:  Chinese writer Murong Xuecun, a continual critic of the CCP , wrote in an opinion article "In my view, Xi's anti-corruption campaign looks more like a Stalinist political purge... he relies on the regulations of the party and not on the laws of the state, the people carrying it out operate like the KGB, and most cases cannot be reported on with any transparency."
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Original:  Duowei wrote that the campaign is part of a wider agenda of systemic reform aimed at restoring legitimacy of the CPC 's mandate to rule, which – in the decades immediately prior – was heavily challenged by widespread corruption, a widening gap between rich and poor, social injustice, and excessive focus on material wealth.
Revised:  Duowei wrote that the campaign is part of a wider agenda of systemic reform aimed at restoring legitimacy of the CCP 's mandate to rule, which – in the decades immediately prior – was heavily challenged by widespread corruption, a widening gap between rich and poor, social injustice, and excessive focus on material wealth.
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Original:  Li believes that not only has Xi's campaign had the effect of truly curbing corrupt practices at all levels of government, it has also restored public confidence in the CPC 's mandate to rule, and has also returned massive ill-gotten gains back into state coffers which could be re-directed towards economic development.
Revised:  Li believes that not only has Xi's campaign had the effect of truly curbing corrupt practices at all levels of government, it has also restored public confidence in the CCP 's mandate to rule, and has also returned massive ill-gotten gains back into state coffers which could be re-directed towards economic development.
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Original:  Counterintelligence rationale A December 2020 article in Foreign Policy suggested that decades of corruption inside of the CPC had created vulnerabilities exploited by outside intelligence agencies, particularly the Central Intelligence Agency.
Revised:  Counterintelligence rationale A December 2020 article in Foreign Policy suggested that decades of corruption inside of the CCP had created vulnerabilities exploited by outside intelligence agencies, particularly the Central Intelligence Agency.
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Original:  In support of this approach, results of a 2003 study suggest that "as job demands increase, high job control is needed to limit fatigue, whereas either high job control or high job social support is needed to enhance intrinsic work motivation"  
Revised:  In support of this approach, results of a 2003 study suggest that "as job demands increase, high job control is needed to limit fatigue, whereas either high job control or high job social support is needed to enhance intrinsic work motivation" . 
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Original: Job control is a person's ability to influence what happens in his or her work environment, in particular to influence matters that are relevant to his or her personal goals.
Revised: Job control is a person's ability to influence what happens in their work environment, in particular to influence matters that are relevant to his or her personal goals.
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Original: Job control is a person's ability to influence what happens in his or her work environment, in particular to influence matters that are relevant to his or her personal goals.
Revised: Job control is a person's ability to influence what happens in his or her work environment, in particular to influence matters that are relevant to their personal goals.
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Original: Astrooceanography also called exo-oceanography is the study of oceans outside planet Earth.
Revised: Astrooceanography also called exo-oceanography is the study of oceans on planets and moons other than Earth.
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Original:  Astrooceanography is closely related to Astrobiology, as oceans are expected to have higher chances to house simple forms of life.
Revised:  Planetary oceanography is closely related to Astrobiology, as oceans are expected to have higher chances to house simple forms of life.
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Original:  Earth is often called the ocean planet because it is 70\% covered in water.
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Original:  Mosher and Sirkin have operationally defined hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger as exciting They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
Revised:  Mosher and Sirkin have operationally defined hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
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Original:  This term has been used pejoratively by some scholars.
Revised:  This term has been used 
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Original:  Studies%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% One of the first studies of hypermasculinity was conducted by Donald L. Mosher and Mark Sirkin in 1984.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% One of the first studies of hypermasculinity was conducted by Donald L. Mosher and Mark Sirkin in 1984.
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Original:  Studies%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% One of the first studies of hypermasculinity was conducted by Donald L. Mosher and Mark Sirkin in 1984.
Revised:  Studies%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% pas conducted by Donald L. Mosher and Mark Sirkin in 1984.
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Original:  Relatively masculine ratios have been associated with male heterosexuality (but also homosexuality), criminality, ADHD, and autism spectrum disorder.
Revised:  Relatively masculine ratios have been associated with male heterosexuality (but also homosexuality), criminality, ADHD, and Autism-spectrum disorder.
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Original:  Samples of feminist activists in Sweden and Austria showed relatively masculine digit ratios compared to the average for women.
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Original: Fetal development Finger length (specifically the lengths of the ring and index fingers), have been correlated with high and low levels of fetal androgens.
Revised:  Finger length (specifically the lengths of the ring and index fingers), have been correlated with high and low levels of fetal androgens.
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Original:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting  They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
Revised:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting Andrew They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
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Original:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting Andrew They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
Revised:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: Callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting Andrew They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
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Original:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting Andrew They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
Revised:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women The belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting Andrew They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
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Original:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly the experience of danger is exciting Andrew They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
Revised:  Mosher and Sirkin operationally define hypermasculinity or the "macho personality" as consisting of three variables: callous sexual attitudes toward women the belief that violence is manly The experience of danger is exciting Andrew They developed the Hypermasculinity Inventory (HMI) designed to measure the three components.
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