wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Works Year Name of work Medium type Instrumentation Length Opus Remarks2017Les Cris de Tatibaganacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers115.00op.1822016Tapovanacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers18.18 op.181 text by Thomas Brando2016Anamorphoseacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers10.10op.1802016Origineacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers17.50 op.179 dedicated to Dieter Kaufmann2016In-quartoinstrumental / ensemble2 violins,
Revised: Works Year Name of work Medium type Instrumentation Length Opus Remarks2017Les Cris de Tatibaganacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers115.00op.1822016Tapovanacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers18.18 op.181 text by Thomas Brando2016Anamorphoseacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers10.10op.1802016Origineacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers 17.50 op.179 dedicated to Dieter Kaufmann2016In-quartoinstrumental / ensemble2 violins,
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Original: Works Year Name of work Medium type Instrumentation Length Opus Remarks2017Les Cris de Tatibaganacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers115.00op.1822016Tapovanacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers18.18 op.181 text by Thomas Brando2016Anamorphoseacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers10.10op.1802016Origineacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers17.50 op.179 dedicated to Dieter Kaufmann2016In-quartoinstrumental / ensemble2 violins,
Revised: Works Year Name of work Medium type Instrumentation Length Opus Remarks2017Les Cris de Tatibaganacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers115.00op.1822016Tapovanacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers18.18 op.181 text by Thomas Brando2016Anamorphoseacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers10.10op.1802016Origineacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers17.50 op.179 dedicated to Dieter Kaufmann2016 In-quarto instrumental / ensemble2 violins,
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Original: Works Year Name of work Medium type Instrumentation Length Opus Remarks2017Les Cris de Tatibaganacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers115.00op.1822016Tapovanacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers18.18 op.181 text by Thomas Brando2016Anamorphoseacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers10.10op.1802016Origineacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers17.50 op.179 dedicated to Dieter Kaufmann2016In-quartoinstrumental / ensemble2 violins,
Revised: Works Year Name of work Medium type Instrumentation Length Opus Remarks2017Les Cris de Tatibaganacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers115.00op.1822016Tapovanacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers18.18 op.181 text by Thomas Brando2016Anamorphoseacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers10.10op.1802016Origineacousmaticstereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers17.50 op.179 dedicated to Dieter Kaufmann2016In-quartoinstrumental / ensemble 2 violins,
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Original:  viola and violoncello21.00 op.178 from the cycle Fantaisies romantiques et baroques/Plis de perversion2015Chambre 44mixed / ensembleflute ,
Revised:  viola and violoncello 21.00 op.178 from the cycle Fantaisies romantiques et baroques/Plis de perversion2015Chambre 44mixed / ensembleflute ,
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Original:  viola and violoncello21.00 op.178 from the cycle Fantaisies romantiques et baroques/Plis de perversion2015Chambre 44mixed / ensembleflute ,
Revised:  viola and violoncello21.00 op.178 from the cycle Fantaisies romantiques et baroques/Plis de perversion2015 Chambre 44 mixed / ensembleflute ,
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Original:  viola and violoncello21.00 op.178 from the cycle Fantaisies romantiques et baroques/Plis de perversion2015Chambre 44mixed / ensembleflute ,
Revised:  viola and violoncello21.00 op.178 from the cycle Fantaisies romantiques et baroques/Plis de perversion2015Chambre 44mixed / ensemble flute ,
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Original:  piano and stereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers10.30op.1772015Túngaramixed / solomarimba,
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Original:  piano and stereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers10.30op.1772015Túngaramixed / solomarimba,
Revised:  piano and stereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers10.30op.1772015Túngaramixed / solo marimba
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Original:  and stereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers06.30 op.176 from the cycle Fantaisies romantiques et baroques/Marais  2015 Sprint instrumental/ensemble flute,
Revised:  and stereophonic acousmonium/ loudspeakers 06.30 op.176 from the cycle Fantaisies romantiques et baroques/Marais 2015 Sprint instrumental/ensemble flute,
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Original: Sherren 's triangle  is an area of skin hyperaesthesia found in acute appendicitis.
Revised: Sherren 's triangle ''' is an area of skin hyperaesthesia found in acute appendicitis.
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Original: Nawaz sharif 's triangle ''' is an area of skin hyperaesthesia found in acute appendicitis.
Revised: Nawaz sharif 's triangle is an area of skin hyperaesthesia found in acute appendicitis.
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Original: College playing career From 1965 to 1968, Rita attended Boise State University playing center for the Boise State URL In 1995, Rita resigned as the Rough Riders'
Revised: College playing career From 1965 to 1968, Rita attended Boise State University playing center for the Boise State Broncos. In 1995, Rita resigned as the Rough Riders'
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Original:  head coach to become the offensive coordinator for one of the new U.S. expansion teams in the CFL, the Memphis Mad URL In 2012, Rita retired from the CFL and turned to high school football coaching, becoming an assistant coach & offensive coordinator with the Trinity College School football team in Port Hope, URL In 2016, Rita moved from Trinity College School to the "Footbal North"
Revised:  head coach to become the offensive coordinator for one of the new U.S. expansion teams in the CFL, the Memphis Mad Dogs. In 2012, Rita retired from the CFL and turned to high school football coaching, becoming an assistant coach & offensive coordinator with the Trinity College School football team in Port Hope, URL In 2016, Rita moved from Trinity College School to the "Footbal North"
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Original:  head coach to become the offensive coordinator for one of the new U.S. expansion teams in the CFL, the Memphis Mad URL In 2012, Rita retired from the CFL and turned to high school football coaching, becoming an assistant coach & offensive coordinator with the Trinity College School football team in Port Hope, URL In 2016, Rita moved from Trinity College School to the "Footbal North"
Revised:  head coach to become the offensive coordinator for one of the new U.S. expansion teams in the CFL, the Memphis Mad URL In 2012, Rita retired from the CFL and turned to high school football coaching, becoming an assistant coach & offensive coordinator with the Trinity College School football team in Port Hope, Ontario. In 2016, Rita moved from Trinity College School to the "Footbal North"
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Original:  program at Clarkson Secondary School in Mississauga as their assistant coach and offensive URL In 2019, Rita was elevated to assistant head coach.
Revised:  program at Clarkson Secondary School in Mississauga as their assistant coach and offensive coordinator. In 2019, Rita was elevated to assistant head coach.
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Original:  Coaching career in Europe After retiring from the Canadian Football League in 2012, Rita discovered Europlayers.com which serves as a job website for European URL This led to his first European coaching job in 2012 as the head coach for the Prague Panthers in the Czech Republic.
Revised:  Coaching career in Europe After retiring from the Canadian Football League in 2012, Rita discovered Europlayers.com which serves as a job website for European sports. This led to his first European coaching job in 2012 as the head coach for the Prague Panthers in the Czech Republic.
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Original:  In 2021, Rita was named as the first ever head coach for the Spanish-based team, Gladiators Football, of the newly formed European League of URL Rita is married to his wife Judit who is from URL also has two sons, Kevin and Harrison, and two grandchildren, Seth and URL As of 2020, Rita and his wife reside in Mississauga, URL
Revised:  In 2021, Rita was named as the first ever head coach for the Spanish-based team, Gladiators Football, of the newly formed European League of Football. Rita is married to his wife Judit who is from URL also has two sons, Kevin and Harrison, and two grandchildren, Seth and URL As of 2020, Rita and his wife reside in Mississauga, URL
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Original:  In 2021, Rita was named as the first ever head coach for the Spanish-based team, Gladiators Football, of the newly formed European League of URL Rita is married to his wife Judit who is from URL also has two sons, Kevin and Harrison, and two grandchildren, Seth and URL As of 2020, Rita and his wife reside in Mississauga, URL
Revised:  In 2021, Rita was named as the first ever head coach for the Spanish-based team, Gladiators Football, of the newly formed European League of URL Rita is married to his wife Judit who is from Hungary..He also has two sons, Kevin and Harrison, and two grandchildren, Seth and URL As of 2020, Rita and his wife reside in Mississauga, URL
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Original:  In 2021, Rita was named as the first ever head coach for the Spanish-based team, Gladiators Football, of the newly formed European League of URL Rita is married to his wife Judit who is from URL also has two sons, Kevin and Harrison, and two grandchildren, Seth and URL As of 2020, Rita and his wife reside in Mississauga, URL
Revised:  In 2021, Rita was named as the first ever head coach for the Spanish-based team, Gladiators Football, of the newly formed European League of URL Rita is married to his wife Judit who is from URL also has two sons, Kevin and Harrison, and two grandchildren, Seth and URL As of 2020, Rita and his wife reside in Mississauga, Ontario.
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Original:  Following the expulsion of the Acadians Jeanson stayed in Acadia and led a group of Acadian irregulars harrying the British .
Revised:  Following the expulsion of the Acadians Jeanson stayed in Acadia and led a group of Acadian irregulars harrying the dawdasdBritish .
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Original:  Following his release he took an oath of allegiance to the British crown and was granted a parcel of land in what is now Grosses Coques.
Revised:  Following his release hi took an oath of allegiance to the British crown and was granted a parcel of land in what is now Grosses Coques.
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Original: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1928)Profile of Arnold Rüütel served as the last Chairman of the Presidium of the Supreme Soviet of the Estonian SSR from April 8, 1983, to March 29, 1990, Chairman of the Supreme Soviet of the Estonian SSR (from May 8, 1990: Supreme Council of the Republic of Estonia) from March 29, 1990, to October 6, 1992, and was the third President of Estonia from October 8, 2001, to October 9, 2006.
Revised: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1928)Profile of Arnold Rüütel served as the last Chairman of the Presidium of the Supreme Soviet of the Estonian SSR from April 8, 1983, to March 29, 1990, Chairman of the Supreme Soviet of the Estonian SSR (from May 8, 1990: Supreme Council of the Republic of Estonia) from March 29, 1990, to October 6, 1992, and was the third president of Estonia from October 8, 2001, to October 9, 2006.
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Original:  He was the second President since Estonia regained independence in 1991.
Revised:  He was the second president since Estonia regained independence in 1991.
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Original: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1928)Profile of Arnold Rüütel served as the last Chairman of the Presidium of the Supreme Soviet of the Estonian SSR from April 8, 1983, to March 29, 1990, Chairman of the Supreme Soviet of the Estonian SSR (from May 8, 1990: Supreme Council of the Republic of Estonia) from March 29, 1990, to October 6, 1992, and was the third president of Estonia from October 8, 2001, to October 9, 2006.
Revised: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1928)Profile of Arnold Rüütel served as the last chairman of the Presidium of the Supreme Soviet of the Estonian SSR from April 8, 1983, to March 29, 1990, Chairman of the Supreme Soviet of the Estonian SSR (from May 8, 1990: Supreme Council of the Republic of Estonia) from March 29, 1990, to October 6, 1992, and was the third president of Estonia from October 8, 2001, to October 9, 2006.
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Original:  After the annexation of Estonia to the USSR, he changed his name to the more russified Arnold Fedorovich Ruutel ().
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Original: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1928)Profile of Arnold Rüütel is an Estonian politician and an agricultural scientist.
Revised: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1928)Profile of Arnold Rüütel is an Estonian politician and agricultural scientist.
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Original: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1928 )Profile of Arnold Rüütel is an Estonian politician and agricultural scientist.
Revised: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1927 )Profile of Arnold Rüütel is an Estonian politician and agricultural scientist.
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Original: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1927 )Profile of Arnold Rüütel is an Estonian politician and agricultural scientist.
Revised: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1926 )Profile of Arnold Rüütel is an Estonian politician and agricultural scientist.
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Original:  Category: 1927 births Category:
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Original: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1927 )Profile of Arnold Rüütel is an Estonian politician and agricultural scientist.
Revised: Arnold Rüütel OIH () (born 10 May 1928 )Profile of Arnold Rüütel is an Estonian politician and agricultural scientist.
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Original: IPS Supported Employment is an evidence-based approach to supported employment for people who suffer from a mental illness.
Revised: IPS Supported Employment is an evidence-based approach to supported employment for people who have a mental illness.
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Original:  This process aims at convergence towards stable employment and toward the client's personal recovery goals.
Revised:  This process aims at convergence towards stable employment and toward the client's personal 
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Original:  Sonnier was sentenced to death  with his younger brother, Eddie, to life on April 25, 1978, for the November 5, 1977, rape and murder of Loretta Ann Bourque, 18, and the murder of David LeBlanc, 17.
Revised:  Sonnier was sentenced to death - with his younger brother, Eddie, to life on April 25, 1978, for the November 5, 1977, rape and murder of Loretta Ann Bourque, 18, and the murder of David LeBlanc, 17.
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Original:  The Supreme Court rejected the request despite information that suggested the wrong person was being executed .
Revised:  The Supreme Court rejected the request .
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Original:  Sonnier was sentenced to death - with his younger brother, Eddie, sentenced to life in prison - on April 25, 1978, for the November 5, 1977, rape and murder of Loretta Ann Bourque, 18, and the murder of David LeBlanc, 17.
Revised:  Sonnier was sentenced to death on April 25, 1978, for the November 5, 1977, rape and murder of Loretta Ann Bourque, 18, and the murder of David LeBlanc, 17.
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Original:  They then told the couple that they were going to drive them to the home of  land's owner to see if the owner wished to press trespassing charges.
Revised:  They then told the couple that they were going to drive them to the home of the land's owner to see if the owner wished to press trespassing charges.
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Original:  He was the first of many death row inmates whom she counseled.
Revised:  He was the first of several death row inmates whom she counseled.
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Original:  She claimed that Elmo was innocent but he felt guilt over his criminal past and for participating in the rape of not only Bourque, but other teenage girls at "lover's lane " , who had come with their boyfriends.
Revised:  She claimed that Elmo was innocent but he felt guilt over his criminal past and for participating in the rape of not only Bourque, but other teenage girls at "lover's lane , , who had come with their boyfriends.
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Original:  The book Dead Family Walking is a potent rebuttal to Prejean’s book, and details the devastating experiences of Loretta Bourque’s family.
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Original:  The foundation has received the Pendrecth Culture Price and it's venue is part of the Rotterdam culture plan.
Revised:  The foundation has received the Pendrecth Culture Prize and it's venue is part of the Rotterdam culture plan.
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Original:  The media lab and music studio both run free artist in residence programms for artists and experimental musicians.
Revised:  The media lab and music studio both run free artist in residence programmes for artists and experimental musicians.
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Original:  Experimental musician Lukas Simonis is the programmer of the artist in residence programm for the music studio.
Revised:  Experimental musician Lukas Simonis is the programmer of the artist in residence programme for the music studio.
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Original:  The studio has a large collection of vintage analogue synths such as the ARP 2500, ARP 2600, Serge synthesizer, EMS Synthi A, AS8899, EMS VCS URL and Korg MS-20 inherited from the Centrum voor Electronische Muziek (CEM) and a collection of experimental musical instruments built by Yuri Landman.
Revised:  The studio has a collection of experimental musical instruments built by Yuri Landman.
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Original:  Cystic fibrosis related diabetes mellitus (CFRD) develops with age, and the median age at diagnosis is 21 years     
Revised:  Cystic fibrosis related diabetes mellitus (CFRD) develops with age, and the median age at diagnosis is 21 years . 
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Original: Epidemiology CFRD occurs in some 20\% of adolescents and 40-50 \% of adults affected by CF.
Revised: Epidemiology CFRD occurs in some 20\% of adolescents and 40–50 \% of adults affected by CF.
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Original: Year Award Category Recipients ResultRef.2008Indonesian Movie AwardsBest Female NewcomerMereka Bilang, Saya Monyet!
Revised: Year Award Category Recipients Result2008Indonesian Movie AwardsBest Female NewcomerMereka Bilang, Saya Monyet!
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Original: Indonesian Film Critics Society  2009 Indonesian Film Festival Citra Award for Best Leading Actress 2009 Indonesian Film Festival Citra Award for Best Original Score King 2010 Indonesian Film Festival Citra Award for Best Leading Actress Minggu Pagi di Victoria Park 
Revised: Indonesian Film Critics Society 2009 Indonesian Film Festival Citra Award for Best Leading Actress Citra Award for Best Original Score King 2010 Indonesian Film Festival Citra Award for Best Leading Actress Minggu Pagi di Victoria Park 
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Original:  2011) TV Commercials Extra Joss (2000, 2004, 2006) JVC (2000) Oskadon (2001) Frisian Flag/Dutch Lady (2006) Dove (2011) You-C 1000 (2011)
Revised:  2011) TV Commercials Extra Joss (2000, 2004, 2006) JVC (2000) Oskadon (2001) Frisian Flag/Dutch Lady2011Dove You-C 1000 (2011)
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Original:  2011) TV Commercials Extra Joss (2000, 2004, 2006) JVC (2000) Oskadon (2001) Frisian Flag/Dutch Lady (2006) Dove (2011) You-C 1000 (2011)
Revised:  2011) TV Commercials Extra Joss (2000, 2004, 2006) JVC (2000) Oskadon (2001) Frisian Flag/Dutch Lady (2006) Dove (2011) You-C 1000 
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Original: Television + YearTitleRoleInformation2010-2012Indonesia Mencari BakatJudge3 Seasons2015Celebrity Lipsync CombatPanelist2015-2016Celebrity Lipsync Battle IndonesiaThe RemixJudgeGuest Judge (Season 1) Main Judge (Season 2) Year Award Category Recipients Result2008Indonesian Movie AwardsBest Female NewcomerMereka Bilang, Saya Monyet!
Revised: Television + YearTitleRoleInformation2010-2012Indonesia Mencari BakatJudge3 Seasons 2015Celebrity Lipsync CombatPanelist2015-2016Celebrity Lipsync Battle IndonesiaThe RemixJudgeGuest Judge (Season 1) Main Judge (Season 2) Year Award Category Recipients Result2008Indonesian Movie AwardsBest Female NewcomerMereka Bilang, Saya Monyet!
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Original: Television + YearTitleRoleInformation2010-2012Indonesia Mencari BakatJudge3 Seasons2015Celebrity Lipsync CombatPanelist2015-2016Celebrity Lipsync Battle IndonesiaThe RemixJudgeGuest Judge (Season 1) Main Judge (Season 2) Year Award Category Recipients Result2008Indonesian Movie AwardsBest Female NewcomerMereka Bilang, Saya Monyet!
Revised: Television + YearTitleRoleInformation2010-2012Indonesia Mencari BakatJudge3 Seasons2015Celebrity Lipsync CombatPanelist2015-2016Celebrity Lipsync Battle IndonesiaThe RemixJudgeGuest Judge (Season 1) Main Judge (Season 2) Year Award Category Recipients Result2008Indonesian Movie Awards Best Female NewcomerMereka Bilang, Saya Monyet!
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Original: Titik Handayani Rajo Bintang (born 10 February 1981), known professionally as Titi Radjo Padmaja (formerly Titi Sjuman), is an Indonesian drummer, singer, songwriter, and actress .
Revised: Titik Handayani Rajo Bintang (born 10 February 1981), known professionally as Titi Radjo Padmaja (formerly Titi Sjuman), is an Indonesian singer, songwriter, and actress .
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Original:  Music Video +YearSong TitleArtistRoleRef.2009  Jujur Aku Tak SanggupPastoMusic Video Actress2011Just The Way You AreTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger2021Leave and GoodbyeTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger, Writer, Producer, Actress
Revised:  Music Videos +YearSong TitleArtistRoleRef.2009 Jujur Aku Tak SanggupPastoMusic Video Actress2011Just The Way You AreTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger2021Leave and GoodbyeTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger, Writer, Producer, Actress
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Original:  Music Video +YearSong TitleArtistRoleRef.2009  Jujur Aku Tak SanggupPastoMusic Video Actress2011Just The Way You AreTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger2021Leave and GoodbyeTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger, Writer, Producer, Actress
Revised:  Music Video +YearSong TitleArtistRoleRef.2009 " Jujur Aku Tak SanggupPastoMusic Video Actress2011Just The Way You AreTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger2021Leave and GoodbyeTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger, Writer, Producer, Actress
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Original:  Music Video +YearSong TitleArtistRoleRef.2009  Jujur Aku Tak SanggupPastoMusic Video Actress2011Just The Way You AreTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger2021Leave and GoodbyeTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger, Writer, Producer, Actress
Revised:  Music Video +YearSong TitleArtistRoleRef.2009 Jujur Aku Tak Sanggup"PastoMusic Video Actress2011"Just The Way You AreTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger2021Leave and GoodbyeTiti Radjo PadmajaSinger, Writer, Producer, Actress
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Original: Titik Handayani Rajo Bintang (born 10 February 1981), known professionally as Titi Radjo Padmaja (formerly Titi Sjuman), is an Indonesian  singer, songwriter, composer, actress, and professional drummer .
Revised: Titik Handayani Rajo Bintang (born 10 February 1981), known professionally as Titi Radjo Padmaja (formerly Titi Sjuman), is an Indonesian drummer, singer, songwriter, composer, actress, and professional drummer .
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Original: Titik Handayani Rajo Bintang (born 10 February 1981), known professionally as Titi Radjo Padmaja (formerly Titi Sjuman), is an Indonesian  singer, songwriter, composer, actress, and professional drummer .
Revised: Titik Handayani Rajo Bintang (born 10 February 1981), known professionally as Titi Radjo Padmaja (formerly Titi Sjuman), is an Indonesian singer, songwriter, and actress .
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