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Original: The Australian media have questioned if the soldiers are making any difference, especially when Lance-Corporal Jones died at the hands of someone he was supposed to be mentoring.
Revised: The Australian media have questioned if the soldiers are making any difference, when Lance-Corporal Jones died at the hands of someone he was supposed to be mentoring.
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Original:  However, Prime Minster , Julia Gillard , believes that Australian soldiers still play a vital role in training hundreds of members of the Afghan Fourth Brigade and does not believe their job has been completed yet.
Revised:  Prime Minster Julia Gillard stated that Australian soldiers still play a vital role in training hundreds of members of the Afghan Fourth Brigade and does not believe their job has been completed yet.
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Original:  But when America invaded Afghanistan on the October 7, 2001, it was the first time it has been invoked.
Revised:  When America invaded Afghanistan on the October 7, 2001, it was the first time it has been invoked.
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Original: Category:Australia Category:Politics and conflicts On Monday night, two Australian soldiers serving in Afghanistan died in separate incidents.
Revised:  On Monday night, two Australian soldiers serving in Afghanistan died in separate incidents.
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Original:  The US, Australia  and New Zealand pledged their alliance of mutual defence when the ANZUS treaty was enacted in 1952.
Revised:  The US, Australia , and New Zealand pledged their alliance of mutual defence when the ANZUS treaty was enacted in 1952.
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Original:  When America invaded Afghanistan on the October 7, 2001, it was the first time it has been invoked.
Revised:  When the United States invaded Afghanistan on the October 7, 2001, it was the first time it has been invoked.
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Original:  When America invaded Afghanistan on the October 7, 2001, it was the first time it has been invoked.
Revised:  When America invaded Afghanistan on October 7, 2001, it was the first time it has been invoked.
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Original:  When America invaded Afghanistan on the October 7, 2001, it was the first time it has been invoked.
Revised:  When America invaded Afghanistan on the October 7, 2001, it was the first time it was invoked.
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Original:  File:STS-134 Official Crew Photo.jpg|Official photo of Endeavour'''s final crew, taken in January 2010.
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Original:  The six-member crew of STS-134 consists of commander , pilot , and mission specialists , , , and . European Space Agency's Vittori is scheduled to be the last non-American to fly aboard the Shuttle.
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Original:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
Revised:  He stated that as NASA "begin %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
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Original:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
Revised:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
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Original:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
Revised:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
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Original:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
Revised:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
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Original:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
Revised:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
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Original:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% ability to tackle big challenges remains steadfast and will ensure that NASA reaches even more destinations farther in the Solar System."
Revised:  He stated that as NASA "begin s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% the transition from the shuttle program to the commercial transportation of its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% crews and cargo, its%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% 
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Original:  The final mission in the Space Shuttle program, , is scheduled to launch on July 8.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Related new
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Original:  The vehicle has traveled a total distance in excess of 197.6 million kilometres (122.8 million miles).
Revised:  The vehicle has traveled a total distance longer than 197.6 million kilometres (122.8 million miles).
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Original:  The spaceflight was the 25th and final flight of Endeavour, as well as the 134th and second-to-last of the entire .
Revised:  The spaceflight was the 25th and final flight of Endeavour, as well as the 134th and next-to-last of the entire .
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Original:  The spaceflight was the 25th and final flight of Endeavour, as well as the 134th and next-to-last of the entire .
Revised:  The spaceflight was the 25th and final flight of Endeavour, as well as the 134th and second-to-last of the entire .
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Original:  The conference of leaders was part of a american backed Arab league effort.
Revised:  The conference of leaders was part of an american backed Arab league effort.
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Original:  The conference of leaders was part of an american backed Arab league effort.
Revised:  The conference of leaders was part of an American-backed Arab league effort.
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Original: UK children's charities announce merger Two of Britain 's leading children' s charities have announced that they are to merge.
Revised:  Two of Britain 's leading children' s charities have announced that they are to merge.
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Original: UK children's charities announce merger Two of Britain 's leading children' s charities have announced that they are to merge.
Revised: UK children's charities announce merger Two of the UK 's leading children' s charities have announced that they are to merge.
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Original: UK children's charities announce merger Two of Britain 's leading children' s charities have announced that they are to merge.
Revised: UK children's charities announce merger Two of Britain 's leading childrens' charities have announced that they are to merge.
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Original:  The two charities have a combined annual income of over £125 million (213 million USD, 182 million Euro)   
Revised:  The two charities have a combined annual income of over £125 million (213 million USD, 182 million Euro) . 
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Original: and previous years' Champions league runners face German giant .
Revised: and previous years' Champions league runners-up face German giant .
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Original:  They previously defeated them based on the away goal rule, in the previous year's Last 16.
Revised:  They previously defeated them based on the away goal rule, in the previous Last 16.
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Original:  Last season, Barça faced City in the Last 16, defeating them 3–1 on aggregate.
Revised:  Last season, Barça faced City in the Last 16.
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Original: An unverified document discovered by the UK tabloid The Daily Mirror claiming to have been leaked from Downing Street has been reported to contain a statement from US President George W. Bush about wishing to bomb the headquarters of Arabic TV station Al Jazeera in Doha, Qatar.
Revised: The UK tabloid The Daily Mirror claiming to have been leaked from Downing Street has been reported to contain a statement from US President George W. Bush about wishing to bomb the headquarters of Arabic TV station Al Jazeera in Doha, Qatar.
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Original: An unverified document discovered by the UK tabloid The Daily Mirror claiming to have been leaked from Downing Street has been reported to contain a statement from US President George W. Bush about wishing to bomb the headquarters of Arabic TV station Al Jazeera in Doha, Qatar.
Revised: An unverified document discovered by the UK tabloid The Daily Mirror has claimed to have obtained a leaked document Downing Street allegedly containing a statement from US President George W. Bush about wishing to bomb the headquarters of Arabic TV station Al Jazeera in Doha, Qatar.
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Original:  Downing Street declined to make a statement, telling BBC News that official procedure prevents it from commenting on "leaked documents"  
Revised:  Downing Street declined to make a statement, telling BBC News that official procedure prevents it from commenting on "leaked documents" . 
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Original:  Police, who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) today, have reached the Co-op bank on Market Street, in the town of . Amongst the officers, a number of them are possessing firearms [ 
Revised:  Police, who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) today, have reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, in the town of . Amongst the officers, a number of them are possessing firearms [ 
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Original:  Police, who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) today, have reached the Co-op bank on Market Street, in the town of . Amongst the officers, a number of them are possessing firearms [ 
Revised:  Police, who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) today, have reached the Co-op bank on Market Street, in the town of . Amongst the officers, a number of them are possessing firearms [a 
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Original: A male adult has claimed to have attached a bomb to his body and has been arrested after being involved in a stand-off with police officers in a , England town.
Revised: A male adult claiming to have attached a bomb to his body and has been arrested after being involved in a stand-off with police officers in a , England town.
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Original: A male adult has claimed to have attached a bomb to his body and has been arrested after being involved in a stand-off with police officers in a , England town.
Revised: A male adult has claimed to have attached a bomb to his body and has been arrested after having been involved in a stand-off with police officers in a , England town.
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Original:  Police, who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) today, have reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, in the town of . Amongst the officers, a number of them were possessing firearms.
Revised:  Police, who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) today, reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, in the town of . Amongst the officers, a number of them were possessing firearms.
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Original:  According to one police spokeswoman, " a n explosive device of some kind - as yet we don't know what this is - has been removed from this individual.
Revised:  According to one police spokeswoman, " n explosive device of some kind - as yet we don't know what this is - has been removed from this individual.
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Original:  Shortly after noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 , the male suspect was placed under arrest . ]
Revised:  Noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 , the male suspect was placed under arrest . ]
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Original:  Shortly after noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 , the male suspect was placed under arrest . ]
Revised:  Shortly after noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 , the male suspect was placed under arrest . a]
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Original:  the male suspect was placed under arrest at 1345 BST approx. (1245 UTC)  . According to a spokeswoman for the police, "[a]n explosive device of some kind - as yet we don't know what this is - has been removed from this individual." 
Revised:  the male suspect was placed under arrest at 1345 BST approx. (1245 UTC) . According to a spokeswoman for the police, "[a]n explosive device of some kind - as yet we don't know what this is - has been removed from this individual." A significant amount of the centre of the town was sealed during this incident.
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Original:  Understandably this caused concern within the community and we would like to thank members of the public for their co-operation in this matter.  [ 
Revised:  Understandably this caused concern within the community and we would like to thank members of the public for their co-operation in this matter. [i 
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Original: A male adult claiming to have attached a bomb to his body and has been arrested after having been involved in a stand-off with police officers in a , England town.
Revised: A male adult claiming to have attached a bomb to his body has been arrested after having been involved in a stand-off with police officers in a , England town.
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Original: A male adult claiming to have attached a bomb to his body and has been arrested after having been involved in a stand-off with police officers in a , England town.
Revised: A male adult claiming to have attached a bomb to his body and has been arrested after a stand-off with police officers in a , England town.
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Original:  Police , who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday, reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, in the town of , having responded to claims of an individual making threats of harming Co-operative bank staffmembers . Amongst the officers, a number of them were possessing firearms . Noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 BST (1220 UTC);
Revised:  Police , who were notified of the incident at the on Market Street, in the town of , having responded to claims of an individual making threats of harming Co-operative bank staffmembers . Amongst the officers, a number of them were possessing firearms . Noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 BST (1220 UTC);
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Original:  Police , who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday, reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, in the town of , having responded to claims of an individual making threats of harming Co-operative bank staffmembers . Amongst the officers, a number of them were possessing firearms . Noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 BST (1220 UTC);
Revised:  Police , who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday, reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, , at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday. There were claims of an individual making threats of harming Co-operative bank staffmembers . Amongst the officers, a number of them were possessing firearms . Noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 BST (1220 UTC);
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Original:  Police , who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday, reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, in the town of , having responded to claims of an individual making threats of harming Co-operative bank staffmembers . Amongst the officers, a number of them were possessing firearms . Noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 BST (1220 UTC);
Revised:  Police , who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday, reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, in the town of , having responded to claims of an individual threatening to harm bank staff . Amongst the officers, a number of them were possessing firearms . Noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 BST (1220 UTC);
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Original:  Police , who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday, reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, in the town of , having responded to claims of an individual making threats of harming Co-operative bank staffmembers . Amongst the officers, a number of them were possessing firearms . Noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 BST (1220 UTC);
Revised:  Police , who were notified of the incident at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday, reached the Co-operative Bank on Market Street, in the town of , having responded to claims of an individual making threats of harming Co-operative bank staffmembers . A number of armed officers attended . Noises resembling bangs were heard at approximately 1320 BST (1220 UTC);
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Original:  the male suspect was placed under arrest at  1345 BST approx. (1245 UTC), just over three hours later .
Revised:  the male suspect was placed under arrest at about 1345 BST approx. (1245 UTC), just over three hours later .
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Original:  the male suspect was placed under arrest at  1345 BST approx. (1245 UTC), just over three hours later .
Revised:  the male suspect was placed under arrest at 1345 BST (1245 UTC), just over three hours later .
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Original:  the male suspect was placed under arrest at  1345 BST approx. (1245 UTC), just over three hours later .
Revised:  the male suspect was placed under arrest at 1345 BST approx. (1245 UTC), just over three hours after the incident began .
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Original:  A significant amount of the centre of the town was sealed during this incident.
Revised:  Much of the town centre was sealed off during this incident.
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Original:  The force had reported the founding of a type of explosive object.
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Original:  Police were notified of the incident at the on Market Street, , at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday .
Revised:  Police were notified of the incident at the on Market Street, at approximately 1020 (0920 ) Thursday .
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Original: In a statement, LulzSec claimed that, "[f]rom a single injection, we accessed EVERYTHING" [].
Revised: In a statement, LulzSec reported that, "[f]rom a single injection, we accessed EVERYTHING" [].
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Original:  The group questioned: "Why do you put such faith in a company that allows itself to become open to these simple attacks?  
Revised:  The group questioned: "Why do you put such faith in a company that allows itself to become open to these simple attacks? " 
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Original:  Seventy-five thousand "music codes" and three-and-a-half million "music coupons" were also alleged broken into, according to a statement on their website.
Revised:  Seventy-five thousand "music codes" and three-and-a-half million "music coupons" were also alleged broken into, according to a statement on thier website.
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Original:  Seventy-five thousand "music codes" and three-and-a-half million "music coupons" were expunged from sony's sql databases, and released, along with a statement on thier website.
Revised:  Seventy-five thousand "music codes" and three-and-a-half million "music coupons" were expunged from sony's sql databases, and released, along with a statement on their website.
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Original:  Sony has been previously under attack by hacktivist collective Anonymous, with 77 million accounts on the were unlawfully taken by hackers in April 2011.
Revised:  This incident is reminiscent of an occasion when the data of over 77 million accounts on the were unlawfully taken by hackers in April 2011.
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Original:  In a statement, LulzSec reported that, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% f rom a single injection, we accessed EVERYTHING"%DIFDELCMD < []%%% . Claiming that Sony had not encrypted data which they allegedly gained access to and "were asking for it", the group questioned: "Why do you put such faith in a company that allows itself to become open to these simple attacks?" spokesperson Jim Kennedy has stated that the corporation is "looking into these claims".
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% f rom a single injection, we accessed EVERYTHING"%DIFDELCMD < []%%% . Claiming that Sony had not encrypted data which they allegedly gained access to and "were asking for it", the group questioned: "Why do you put such faith in a company that allows itself to become open to these simple attacks?" spokesperson Jim Kennedy has stated that the corporation is "looking into these claims".
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Original:  In a statement, LulzSec reported that, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% f rom a single injection, we accessed EVERYTHING"%DIFDELCMD < []%%% . Claiming that Sony had not encrypted data which they allegedly gained access to and "were asking for it", the group questioned: "Why do you put such faith in a company that allows itself to become open to these simple attacks?" spokesperson Jim Kennedy has stated that the corporation is "looking into these claims".
Revised:  In a statement, LulzSec reported that, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% rom a single injection, we accessed EVERYTHING"%DIFDELCMD < []%%% . Claiming that Sony had not encrypted data which they allegedly gained access to and "were asking for it", the group questioned: "Why do you put such faith in a company that allows itself to become open to these simple attacks?" spokesperson Jim Kennedy has stated that the corporation is "looking into these claims".
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