wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The Arcadia leaving Southampton in 2006 Cocaine with a street value of £1.2 million (US$2 million) was seized as the  P&O cruise ship Arcadia arrived in its home port of Southampton, on the south coast of England, early yesterday.
Revised: The Arcadia leaving Southampton in 2006 Cocaine with a street value of £1.2 million (US$2 million) was seized as the P&O Cruises' ship Arcadia arrived in its home port of Southampton, on the south coast of England, early yesterday.
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Original:  The hackers attack the servers taking up all the available space, preventing the legitimate user from accessing   
Revised:  The hackers attack the servers taking up all the available space, preventing the legitimate user from accessing . 
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Original:  " Project Chanology, which is part of Anonymous, advises its members to carry out.
Revised:  Project Chanology, which is part of Anonymous, advises its members to carry out.
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Original:  "Dmitriy Guzner, 18, of Verona, New Jersey, has agreed to plead guilty to computer hacking for his role in the distributed denial of service (DDOS) attack against the Scientology websites.  
Revised:  "Dmitriy Guzner, 18, of Verona, New Jersey, has agreed to plead guilty to computer hacking for his role in the distributed denial of service (DDOS) attack against the Scientology websites. " 
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Original:  "Dmitriy Guzner, 18, of Verona, New Jersey, has agreed to plead guilty to computer hacking for his role in the distributed denial of service (DDOS) attack against the Scientology websites.  
Revised:  "Dmitriy Guzner, 18, of Verona, New Jersey, has agreed to plead guilty to computer hacking for his role in the distributed denial of service (DDOS) attack against the Scientology websites. Related new
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Original: A DDoS attack occurs when multiple computers  to attack a certain website with so much traffic that it is not accessible.
Revised: A DDoS attack occurs when multiple computers are used to attack a certain website with so much traffic that it is not accessible.
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Original:  The hackers attack the servers taking up all the available space, preventing the legitimate user from accessing  .
Revised:  The hackers attack the servers taking up all the available space, preventing the legitimate user from accessing it .
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Original:  The hackers attack the servers taking up all the available space, preventing the legitimate user from accessing it .
Revised:  The hackers attack the servers taking up all the available space, preventing the legitimate user from accessing .
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Original:  In Buffalo, New York today , a suspicious packages was received by National Action Financial Services, a subsidiary of Sitel, Inc..
Revised:  In Buffalo, New York , a suspicious packages was received by National Action Financial Services, a subsidiary of Sitel, Inc..
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Original:  In Buffalo, New York today , a suspicious packages was received by National Action Financial Services, a subsidiary of Sitel, Inc..
Revised:  In Buffalo, New York today , a suspicious package was received by National Action Financial Services, a subsidiary of Sitel, Inc..
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Original:  According to FBI spokesperson  Earl Gould Buffalo FBI media coordinator the initial call for response was 10:30AM EST , in which their mail department found the package, evacuated the building and contacted the local police department.
Revised:  According to FBI spokesperson , Earl Gould Buffalo FBI media coordinator the initial call for response was 10:30AM EST , in which their mail department found the package, evacuated the building and contacted the local police department.
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Original:  According to FBI spokesperson  Earl Gould Buffalo FBI media coordinator the initial call for response was 10:30AM EST , in which their mail department found the package, evacuated the building and contacted the local police department.
Revised:  According to FBI spokesperson Earl Gould Buffalo , the initial call for response was 10:30AM EST , in which their mail department found the package, evacuated the building and contacted the local police department.
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Original:  According to FBI spokesperson  Earl Gould Buffalo FBI media coordinator the initial call for response was 10:30AM EST , in which their mail department found the package, evacuated the building and contacted the local police department.
Revised:  According to FBI spokesperson Earl Gould Buffalo FBI media coordinator the initial call for was placed at 10:30AM EST , in which their mail department found the package, evacuated the building and contacted the local police department.
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Original:  According to FBI spokesperson  Earl Gould Buffalo FBI media coordinator the initial call for response was 10:30AM EST , in which their mail department found the package, evacuated the building and contacted the local police department.
Revised:  According to FBI spokesperson Earl Gould Buffalo FBI media coordinator the initial call for response was 10:30AM EST . The mail department found the package, evacuated the building and contacted the local police department.
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Original:  400px|right The police department then contacted the United States Department of Homeland Security who were finished at the scene by 3:00PM EST.
Revised:  The police department then contacted the United States Department of Homeland Security who were finished at the scene by 3:00PM EST.
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Original:  400px|right The police department then contacted the United States Department of Homeland Security who were finished at the scene by 3:00PM EST.
Revised:  400px|right The police department then contacted the Department of Homeland Security who were finished at the scene by 3:00PM EST.
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Original:  After interviews with several employees were refused, one agreed after being only identified as KR , and he said management was being very "hush hush" about it but when he came in , it was a "regular day at work now" jokingly .
Revised:  After interviews with several employees were refused, one agreed after being only identified as KR . He said management was being very "hush hush" about it but when he came in , it was a "regular day at work now" jokingly .
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Original:  After interviews with several employees were refused, one agreed after being only identified as KR , and he said management was being very "hush hush" about it but when he came in , it was a "regular day at work now" jokingly .
Revised:  After interviews with several employees were refused, one agreed after being only identified as KR , and he said management was being very "hush hush" about it but when he came in and jokingly that it was a "regular day at work now" jokingly .
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Original:  After interviews with several employees were refused, one agreed after being only identified as KR , and he said management was being very "hush hush" about it but when he came in , it was a "regular day at work now" jokingly .
Revised:  After interviews with several employees were refused, one agreed after being only identified as KR , and he said management was being very "hush hush" about it but when he came in , it was a "regular day at work now" .
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Original:  He also stated the first responders to the scene did "everything right, and contained it immediately .
Revised:  He also stated the first responders to the scene did "everything right, and contained it immediately 
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Original:  According to FBI spokesperson, Earl Gould Buffalo, the initial call for was placed at 10:30AM EST Yesterday.
Revised:  According to FBI spokesperson, Earl Gould Buffalo, the initial call was placed at 10:30AM EST Yesterday.
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Original: 400px|right In Buffalo, New York , a suspicious package was received by National Action Financial Services, a subsidiary of Sitel, Inc..
Revised: 400px|right In Buffalo, New York a suspicious package was received by National Action Financial Services, a subsidiary of Sitel, Inc..
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Original:  According to FBI spokesperson , Earl Gould Buffalo, the initial call was placed at 10:30AM EST Yesterday.
Revised:  According to FBI spokesperson Earl Gould Buffalo, the initial call was placed at 10:30AM EST Yesterday.
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Original:  The mail department found the package, evacuated the building  and contacted the local police department.
Revised:  The mail department found the package, evacuated the building , and contacted the local police department.
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Original:  The police department then contacted the Department of Homeland Security who were finished at the scene by 3:00PM EST.
Revised:  The police department then contacted the Department of Homeland Security , who finished at the scene by 3:00PM EST.
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Original:  After interviews with several employees were refused, one agreed  after being only identified as KR.
Revised:  After interviews with several employees were refused, one agreed - after being only identified as KR.
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Original:  He said management was being very "hush hush" about it but when he came in and jokingly that it was a "regular day at work now".
Revised:  He said management was being very "hush hush" about the incident, but when he came in and jokingly that it was a "regular day at work now".
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Original:  He said management was being very "hush hush" about it but when he came in and jokingly that it was a "regular day at work now".
Revised:  He said management was being very "hush hush" about it but when he came in he jokingly said that it was a "regular day at work now".
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Original: 400px |right In Buffalo , New York a suspicious package was received by National Action Financial Services, a subsidiary of Sitel, Inc..
Revised: 400px |right In Buffalo New York, a suspicious package was received by National Action Financial Services, a subsidiary of Sitel, Inc..
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Original: Overall, the cuts would signal the most dramatic cutback of public broadcasting the Congress created the CPB in 1967.
Revised: Overall, the cuts would signal the most dramatic cutback of public broadcasting the Congress created the CPB in 
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Original:  Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:United States category:Politics and conflic
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:United States category:Politics and conflic
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Original:  Wikinews found that his suicide happened just one day before he was to be charged for a crime unrelated to the threat and that authorities had dropped all other charges against him , in relation to the hoax.
Revised:  Wikinews found that his suicide happened just one day before he was to be charged for a crime unrelated to the threat and that authorities had dropped all other charges against him in relation to the hoax.
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Original: The accusations are part of a Scientology tactic  developed by the organization's founder, L. Ron Hubbard called "fair-game".
Revised: The accusations are part of a Scientology tactic said to be developed by the organization's founder, L. Ron Hubbard called "fair-game".
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Original:  The Church uses this tactic to harass people , often fabricating lies and defamation against those who protest or criticize their beliefs .
Revised:  Anonymous claims that the Church uses this tactic to harass people , often fabricating lies and defamation against those who protest or criticize their beliefs .
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Original:  The Church uses this tactic to harass people , often fabricating lies and defamation against those who protest or criticize their beliefs .
Revised:  The Church uses this tactic to harass people .
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Original: The accusations are part of  a Scientology tactic said to be developed by the organization's founder, L. Ron Hubbard called "fair-game".
Revised: The accusations are part of a Scientology tactic called "fair-game".
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Original: The Church , on October 18, 2008 accused Anonymous of being involved in the November 2007 shooting at Jokela High School  , in which a man named Pekka-Eric Auvinen  shot and killed eight people , and himself.
Revised: The Church accused Anonymous of being involved in the November 2007 shooting at Jokela High School , in which a man named Pekka-Eric Auvinen shot and killed eight people , and himself.
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Original:  On October 17, the President of the Church of Scientology in New York City, John Carmichael, accused Anonymous of being behind the shooting.
Revised:  On October 17, the President of the Church of Scientology in New York City, John Carmichael, accused Anonymous of being related the shooting.
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Original: The accusations are part of a Scientology tactic developed by the organization's founder, L. Ron Hubbard called "fair-game".
Revised: The accusations appear to be part of a Scientology tactic developed by the organization's founder, L. Ron Hubbard called "fair-game".
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Original: "Anonymous member Pekka-Eric Auvinen shot and killed seven students, a nurse and a teacher at Joleka High School in Finland before turning the gun on himself and taking his own life," said the Church in the October 18 press release.
Revised: "Anonymous member Pekka-Eric Auvinen shot and killed seven students, a nurse and a teacher at Jokela High School in Finland before turning the gun on himself and taking his own life," said the Church in the October 18 press release.
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Original:  In addition, the subcomittee  also acted to eliminate federal money for the Corporation for Public Broadasting, a body designed to pass funds onto public broadcasters ;
Revised:  In addition, the subcomittee also acted to eliminate federal money for the Corporation for Public Broadasting, a body created by Congress to pass funds onto public broadcasters ;
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Original:  starting with a 25 percent reduction next year, from $400 million to $300 million  .
Revised:  starting with a 25 percent reduction in next year's budget, down from $400 million to $300 million .
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Original:     Overall, the cuts would signal the most dramatic cutback of public broadcasting the Congress created the CPB in 1967. Sour
Revised:  Overall, the cuts would signal the most dramatic cutback of public broadcasting since Congress created the CPB in 1967. Sour
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Original: "Ready to Learn was one of more than 50 programs terminated in the spending bill," he told the New YOrk Times.
Revised: "Ready to Learn was one of more than 50 programs terminated in the spending bill," he told the New York Times.
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Original: An e-mail virus affecting Microsoft Windows is currently doing the rounds, trying to ensnare victims by claiming that pop-star Michael Jackson has attempted suicide.
Revised: An e-mail virus affecting Microsoft Windows is currently making the rounds, trying to ensnare victims by claiming that pop-star Michael Jackson has attempted suicide.
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Original:  A security consultant from secuirty firm Sophos says "That may not surprise people who think it might contain genuine breaking news about Michael Jackson," and that "The sick minds behind viruses and other malware often exploit celebrity names and news stories in an attempt to infect as many people as possible," said Ms Theriault.
Revised:  A security consultant from security firm Sophos says "That may not surprise people who think it might contain genuine breaking news about Michael Jackson," and that "The sick minds behind viruses and other malware often exploit celebrity names and news stories in an attempt to infect as many people as possible," said Ms Theriault.
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Original:  She urged users to be very wary when opening e-mail attachments in unsoliciated e-mail messages.
Revised:  She urged users to be very wary when opening e-mail attachments in unsolicited e-mail messages.
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Original: A Canadian farmer has announced that he will continue to provide his customers with raw milk despite the fact that courts have ordered his to stop providing his customers with the product.
Revised: A Canadian farmer has announced that he will continue to provide his customers with raw milk despite the fact that courts have ordered him to stop providing his customers with the product.
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Original: Raw milk is banned in Canada, as officials allege that it can carry infections such at E. coli, salmonella and Listeria.
Revised: Raw milk is banned in Canada, as it can carry infections such at E. coli, salmonella and Listeria.
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Original: Raw milk is banned in Canada, as it can carry infections such at E. coli, salmonella and Listeria.
Revised: Raw milk is banned in Canada, as it can carry infections such as E. coli, salmonella and Listeria.
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Original:  Supporters of the right to consume raw milk argue that is has large health benefits and a much better taste.
Revised:  Supporters of the right to consume raw milk argue that it has large health benefits and a much better taste.
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Original:  "When Gandhi picked up the salt, he kept marching, and when Martin Luther King, Jr. started the Montgomery bus strike, he kept going until the law was changed," he explained  
Revised:  "When Gandhi picked up the salt, he kept marching, and when Martin Luther King, Jr. started the Montgomery bus strike, he kept going until the law was changed," he explained . 
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Original: : When and how did you first come up with the idea that it is possible to become addicted to the Internet? : Do you have any ideas for how Internet addiction could be treated?
Revised:  When and how did you first come up with the idea that it is possible to become addicted to the Internet? : Do you have any ideas for how Internet addiction could be treated?
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Original: : When and how did you first come up with the idea that it is possible to become addicted to the Internet? : Do you have any ideas for how Internet addiction could be treated?
Revised: : When and how did you first come up with the idea that it is possible to become addicted to the Internet? Do you have any ideas for how Internet addiction could be treated?
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Original:  : Activities such as gaming and viewing pornography predate the Internet, as does the potential to be addicted to them.
Revised:  Activities such as gaming and viewing pornography predate the Internet, as does the potential to be addicted to them.
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Original:  What is different about it when it is online? : What do you want to see governments do in response? : What advice would you give to someone who is addicted to the Internet, assuming treatment is unavailable? : Why do you think there is a lack of major studies or official policy on Internet addiction? : If someone was addicted, they likely would remain housebound and online, making detection difficult.
Revised:  What is different about it when it is online? What do you want to see governments do in response? : What advice would you give to someone who is addicted to the Internet, assuming treatment is unavailable? : Why do you think there is a lack of major studies or official policy on Internet addiction? : If someone was addicted, they likely would remain housebound and online, making detection difficult.
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Original:  What is different about it when it is online? : What do you want to see governments do in response? : What advice would you give to someone who is addicted to the Internet, assuming treatment is unavailable? : Why do you think there is a lack of major studies or official policy on Internet addiction? : If someone was addicted, they likely would remain housebound and online, making detection difficult.
Revised:  What is different about it when it is online? : What do you want to see governments do in response? What advice would you give to someone who is addicted to the Internet, assuming treatment is unavailable? : Why do you think there is a lack of major studies or official policy on Internet addiction? : If someone was addicted, they likely would remain housebound and online, making detection difficult.
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Original:  What is different about it when it is online? : What do you want to see governments do in response? : What advice would you give to someone who is addicted to the Internet, assuming treatment is unavailable? : Why do you think there is a lack of major studies or official policy on Internet addiction? : If someone was addicted, they likely would remain housebound and online, making detection difficult.
Revised:  What is different about it when it is online? : What do you want to see governments do in response? : What advice would you give to someone who is addicted to the Internet, assuming treatment is unavailable? Why do you think there is a lack of major studies or official policy on Internet addiction? : If someone was addicted, they likely would remain housebound and online, making detection difficult.
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Original:  What is different about it when it is online? : What do you want to see governments do in response? : What advice would you give to someone who is addicted to the Internet, assuming treatment is unavailable? : Why do you think there is a lack of major studies or official policy on Internet addiction? : If someone was addicted, they likely would remain housebound and online, making detection difficult.
Revised:  What is different about it when it is online? : What do you want to see governments do in response? : What advice would you give to someone who is addicted to the Internet, assuming treatment is unavailable? : Why do you think there is a lack of major studies or official policy on Internet addiction? If someone was addicted, they likely would remain housebound and online, making detection difficult.
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Original: Dr  Jerald Block is a psychiatrist based in Portland, Oregon, United States.
Revised: Dr . Jerald Block is a psychiatrist based in Portland, Oregon, United States.
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Original:  Dr  Block has attracted some media attention due to one particular theory of his - the idea that Internet addiction can be viewed as a distinct mental condition.
Revised:  Dr . Block has attracted some media attention due to one particular theory of his - the idea that Internet addiction can be viewed as a distinct mental condition.
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Original:  Dr  Block has attracted some media attention due to one particular theory of his - the idea that Internet addiction can be viewed as a distinct mental condition.
Revised:  Dr Block has attracted some media attention due to one theory of his - the idea that Internet addiction can be viewed as a distinct mental condition.
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Original:  In an interview with Wikinews, Dr Block explains all about this theory, including what needs  done about it, and the idea that withdrawal can cause a violent response from an adict . Below is the full exclusive interview : The gentle approach is to talk about the issue, come to some agreement about whether it truly is a problem, and then try to negotiate some sort of mutually-agreed on treatment plan.
Revised:  In an interview with Wikinews, Dr . Block discusses this theory, including what needs done about it, and the idea that withdrawal can cause a violent response from an adict . Below is the full exclusive interview : The gentle approach is to talk about the issue, come to some agreement about whether it truly is a problem, and then try to negotiate some sort of mutually-agreed on treatment plan.
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