wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The Conscious Discipline Brain State Model has three states: Survival State (Am I safe?), Emotional State (Am I loved?), and Executive State (What can I learn from URL
Revised:  The Conscious Discipline Brain State Model has three states: Survival State (Am I safe?), Emotional State (Am I loved?), and Executive State (What can I learn from this?).
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Original: Just Friedrich Rudolph Kaufmann Höhne , commonly known as Friedrich Kaufmann Höhne (1831 – Bloemfontein, 19 April 1879),  South African (Boer) politician, Government Secretary and in 1872 Acting State President of the Orange Free State, during the absence of State President Brand.
Revised: Just Friedrich Rudolph Kaufmann Höhne (1831 – Bloemfontein, 19 April 1879), South African (Boer) politician, Government Secretary and in 1872 Acting State President of the Orange Free State, during the absence of State President Brand.
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Original: Just Friedrich Rudolph Kaufmann Höhne , commonly known as Friedrich Kaufmann Höhne (1831 – Bloemfontein, 19 April 1879),  South African (Boer) politician, Government Secretary and in 1872 Acting State President of the Orange Free State, during the absence of State President Brand.
Revised: Just Friedrich Rudolph Kaufmann Höhne , commonly known as Friedrich Kaufmann Höhne (1831 – Bloemfontein, 19 April 1879), commonly known as Friedrich Kaufmann Höhne, South African (Boer) politician, Government Secretary and in 1872 Acting State President of the Orange Free State, during the absence of State President Brand.
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Original:  Career Höhne had a long career in the service of the Orange Free State, starting circa 1863 as Landdrost of the District of Philippolis.
Revised:  Höhne had a long career in the service of the Orange Free State, starting circa 1863 as Landdrost of the District of Philippolis.
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Original: In 1978 Andrew McGuire (burn survivor, activist and winner of a 1985 MacArthur Fellowship for his work on the flammability of children's sleepwear) started a grassroots campaign to prevent house fire deaths by changing the cigarette.
Revised: In 1978 Andrew McGuire started a grassroots campaign to prevent house fire deaths by changing the cigarette.
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Original: Fire safe cigarettes are produced by adding two to three thin bands of less-porous cigarette paper along the length of the cigarette, creating  series of harder-to-burn “speed bumps.”
Revised: Fire safe cigarettes are produced by adding two to three thin bands of less-porous cigarette paper along the length of the cigarette, creating a series of harder-to-burn “speed bumps.”
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Original:  she called for the National Bureau of Standards  (now the National Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST)) to develop the first less fire-prone cigarette, which NBS introduced in 1932.
Revised:  she called for the National Bureau of Standards (NBS) (now the National Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST)) to develop the first less fire-prone cigarette, which NBS introduced in 1932.
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Original: Fire safe cigarettes are produced by adding two to three thin bands of less-porous cigarette paper along the length of the cigarette, creating a series of harder-to-burn “speed bumps . ”  As the cigarette burns down, it will tend to be extinguished at each of these points unless the user is periodically intensifying the flame by inhaling.
Revised: Fire safe cigarettes are produced by adding two to three thin bands of less-porous cigarette paper along the length of the cigarette, creating a series of harder-to-burn “speed bumps ” As the cigarette burns down, it will tend to be extinguished at each of these points unless the user is periodically intensifying the flame by inhaling.
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Original: Fire safe cigarettes are produced by adding two to three thin bands of less-porous cigarette paper along the length of the cigarette, creating a series of harder-to-burn “speed bumps . ”  As the cigarette burns down, it will tend to be extinguished at each of these points unless the user is periodically intensifying the flame by inhaling.
Revised: Fire safe cigarettes are produced by adding two to three thin bands of less-porous cigarette paper along the length of the cigarette, creating a series of harder-to-burn “speed bumps . ” . As the cigarette burns down, it will tend to be extinguished at each of these points unless the user is periodically intensifying the flame by inhaling.
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Original:  The Boston Herald American covered the story on 31 March 1932, noting that after three years of research the NBS had developed a “self-snubbing” cigarette and had suggested that cigarette manufacturers “take up the idea . ”  None did.
Revised:  The Boston Herald American covered the story on 31 March 1932, noting that after three years of research the NBS had developed a “self-snubbing” cigarette and had suggested that cigarette manufacturers “take up the idea ” None did.
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Original:  The Boston Herald American covered the story on 31 March 1932, noting that after three years of research the NBS had developed a “self-snubbing” cigarette and had suggested that cigarette manufacturers “take up the idea . ”  None did.
Revised:  The Boston Herald American covered the story on 31 March 1932, noting that after three years of research the NBS had developed a “self-snubbing” cigarette and had suggested that cigarette manufacturers “take up the idea . ” . None did.
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Original:  Based on the NIST research, ASTM International's Committee E05 on Fire Standards developed E 2187, a "Standard Test Method for Measuring the Ignition Strength of Cigarettes , "  which evaluates cigarette's capacity to set fire to bedding and upholstered furniture in 2002.
Revised:  Based on the NIST research, ASTM International's Committee E05 on Fire Standards developed E 2187, a "Standard Test Method for Measuring the Ignition Strength of Cigarettes " which evaluates cigarette's capacity to set fire to bedding and upholstered furniture in 2002.
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Original:  Based on the NIST research, ASTM International's Committee E05 on Fire Standards developed E 2187, a "Standard Test Method for Measuring the Ignition Strength of Cigarettes , "  which evaluates cigarette's capacity to set fire to bedding and upholstered furniture in 2002.
Revised:  Based on the NIST research, ASTM International's Committee E05 on Fire Standards developed E 2187, a "Standard Test Method for Measuring the Ignition Strength of Cigarettes , " , which evaluates cigarette's capacity to set fire to bedding and upholstered furniture in 2002.
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Original:  August 1993 Federal efforts to implement a standard stalled, as the Reagan and Bush administrations preferred free markets to regulation.
Revised:  Federal efforts to implement a standard stalled, as the Reagan and Bush administrations preferred free markets to regulation.
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Original:   The National Fire Protection Association decided to fund the Fire Safe Cigarette Coalition to accelerate this grassroots movement.
Revised:  In 2006 The National Fire Protection Association decided to fund the Fire Safe Cigarette Coalition to accelerate this grassroots movement.
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Original:  Since 1982, fifteen lawsuits have been filed regarding cigarette-ignited fire deaths and injuries.
Revised:  Since 1982, multiple lawsuits have been filed regarding cigarette-ignited fire deaths and injuries.
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Original: Nabil Mazari (born February 18, 1984 in Tizi Ouzou , Algeria) is a footballer .
Revised: Nabil Mazari (born February 18, 1984 in Tizi Ouzou ) is an Algerian football player .
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Original:  He is the brother of yacine hamchaoui a current soccer player at graceland university National team statistics 
Revised:  == National team statistics 
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Original:  He is the brother of yacine hamchaoui a current soccer player at graceland university National team statistics 
Revised:  He is the brother of yacine hamchaoui a current soccer player at graceland university National team statistics ==
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Original:  ==  National team statistics == Algeria national teamYearAppsGoals200010200100200221200310Total41
Revised:  == National team statistics Algeria national teamYearAppsGoals200010200100200221200310Total41
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Original: Yacine Amaouche (born June 26, 1979 in Amizour) is a  footballer.
Revised: Yacine Amaouche (born June 26, 1979 in Amizour) is a former footballer.
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Original:  He currently plays as a forward for MSP Batna in the Algerian league.
Revised:  He last played as a forward for MSP Batna in the Algerian league.
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Original: Nabil Hamouda (born January 4 , 1983 in Lakhdaria, Algeria) is an Algerian footballer.
Revised: Nabil Hamouda (born 4 , 1983 in Lakhdaria, Algeria) is an Algerian footballer.
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Original:  As the columnist wrote, "Surely further research in needed.
Revised:  As the columnist wrote, "Surely further research is needed.
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Original:  If they were freestanding  they hung from a brass chain , with the most elaborate having multiple tiers, each chamber containing a different color  water.
Revised:  If they were freestanding , they hung from a brass chain , with the most elaborate having multiple tiers, each chamber containing a different color water.
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Original:  If they were freestanding  they hung from a brass chain , with the most elaborate having multiple tiers, each chamber containing a different color  water.
Revised:  If they were freestanding they hung from a brass chain ; the most elaborate having multiple tiers, each chamber containing a different color water.
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Original:  If they were freestanding  they hung from a brass chain , with the most elaborate having multiple tiers, each chamber containing a different color  water.
Revised:  If they were freestanding they hung from a brass chain , with the most elaborate had multiple tiers, each chamber containing a different color water.
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Original:  If they were freestanding  they hung from a brass chain , with the most elaborate having multiple tiers, each chamber containing a different color  water.
Revised:  If they were freestanding they hung from a brass chain , with the most elaborate having multiple tiers, each chamber containing a different color of water.
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Original: While the mortar and pestle are still considered a symbol of pharmacy, show globes were displayed almost exclusively in English-speaking countries .
Revised: Show globes were displayed almost exclusively in English-speaking countries .
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Original:  A US patent was granted in 1869 to Henry Whitney of Cambridge, Massachusetts, for a show globe with a colored glass body with a neck and base of transparent uncolored glass.
Revised:  A U.S. patent was granted in 1869 to Henry Whitney of Cambridge, Massachusetts, for a show globe with a colored glass body with a neck and base of transparent uncolored glass.
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Original:  In the US , globes were usually illuminated by a light placed behind them.
Revised:  In the United States , globes were usually illuminated by a light placed behind them.
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Original: Atmospheric dynamics involves the study of observations and theory dealing with all motion systems of meteorological importance  . Common topics studied include diverse phenomena such as thunderstorms, tornadoes, gravity waves, tropical cyclones, extratropical cyclones, jet streams, and global-scale circulations.
Revised: Atmospheric dynamics is the study of observations and theory dealing with all motion systems of meteorological importance . Common topics studied include diverse phenomena such as thunderstorms, tornadoes, gravity waves, tropical cyclones, extratropical cyclones, jet streams, and global-scale circulations.
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Original: Atmospheric dynamics involves the study of observations and theory dealing with all motion systems of meteorological importance  . Common topics studied include diverse phenomena such as thunderstorms, tornadoes, gravity waves, tropical cyclones, extratropical cyclones, jet streams, and global-scale circulations.
Revised: Atmospheric dynamics involves the study of motion systems of meteorological importance . Common topics studied include diverse phenomena such as thunderstorms, tornadoes, gravity waves, tropical cyclones, extratropical cyclones, jet streams, and global-scale circulations.
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Original:  Atmospheric science has been extended to the field of planetary science and the study of the atmospheres of the planets and natural satellites of the solar system .
Revised:  Atmospheric science has been extended to the field of planetary science and the study of the atmospheres of the planets and natural satellites of the Solar System .
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Original:  Bundesliga players Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in  Germany Category:Association football forwards Category:Egyptian Premier League playe
Revised:  Bundesliga players Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Egypt Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Germany Category:Association football forwards Category:Egyptian Premier League playe
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Original:  born June 6, 1987) is an Algerian professional footballer who plays as a forward for USM Blida .
Revised:  born June 6, 1987) is an Algerian professional footballer who plays as a forward .
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Original: A motivational speaker or inspirational speaker is a speaker who makes speeches intended to motivate or inspire an audience.
Revised: A motivational speaker is a speaker who makes speeches intended to motivate or inspire an audience.
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Original: Quadriplegic Motivational Speaker Robert Paylor A motivational speaker is a speaker who makes speeches intended to motivate or inspire an audience.
Revised:  A motivational speaker is a speaker who makes speeches intended to motivate or inspire an audience.
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Original: A motivational speaker   is a speaker who makes speeches intended to motivate or inspire an audience.
Revised: A motivational speaker A motivational speaker is a speaker who makes speeches intended to motivate or inspire an audience.
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Original:  He is an award-winning fictionist and poet, and also works as a translator, an editor, a book designer.
Revised:  He is a fictionist and poet, and also works as a translator, an editor, a book designer.
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Original:   On July 15,   2010, Akrour signed a one-year contract , with an option for a second year , with Ligue 2 side FC Istres .
Revised:  On July 15, 2010, Akrour returned to FC Istres, signing a one-year contract , with an option for a second year , with Ligue 2 side FC Istres .
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Original:   On July 15,   2010, Akrour signed a one-year contract , with an option for a second year , with Ligue 2 side FC Istres .
Revised:  On July 15, 2010, Akrour signed a one-year contract with an option for a second year , with Ligue 2 side FC Istres .
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Original:  Akrour   announced his retirement from playing in July 2019 , aged 45, and took up a role as  youth coach with Annecy.
Revised:  Akrour announced his retirement from playing in July 2019 aged 45, and took up a role as youth coach with Annecy.
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Original:  Akrour   announced his retirement from playing in July 2019 , aged 45, and took up a role as  youth coach with Annecy.
Revised:  Akrour announced his retirement from playing in July 2019 , aged 45, in order to take up a role as youth coach with Annecy.
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Original:  Akrour   announced his retirement from playing in July 2019 , aged 45, and took up a role as  youth coach with Annecy.
Revised:  Akrour announced his retirement from playing in July 2019 , aged 45, and took up a role as a youth coach with Annecy.
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Original:  Akrour   announced his retirement from playing in July 2019 , aged 45, and took up a role as  youth coach with Annecy.
Revised:  Akrour announced his retirement from playing in July 2019 , aged 45, and took up a role as youth coach with 
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Original:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring  on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
Revised:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry . on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
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Original:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring  on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
Revised:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring on his début for Chambéry in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
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Original:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring  on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
Revised:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring on his début for the club in a friendly match , Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
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Original:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring  on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
Revised:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" and followed this with good performances in the league, managing two goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
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Original:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring  on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
Revised:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six appearances before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
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Original:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring  on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the season and remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
Revised:  In January 2020, he came out of retirement to join Chambéry , scoring on his début for the club in a friendly match . Sport | Nassim Akrour (45 ans) débarque à Chambéry : "Je suis toujours ambitieux" He scored two league goals in six games before the end of the 2019-20 season. Akrour remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
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Original:  He began his career with Olympique Noisy-le-Sec, moving to England in 1997 to join Sutton United, where he scored 19 goals in 41 appearances during the 1998-99 season as the club won promotion to the Football URL He left Sutton in 1999, joining new divisional rivals Woking;
Revised:  He began his career with Olympique Noisy-le-Sec, moving to England in 1997 to join Sutton United, where he scored 19 goals in 41 appearances during the 1998-99 season as the club won promotion to the Football Conference. He left Sutton in 1999, joining new divisional rivals Woking;
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Original:  Akrour remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some URL
Revised:  Akrour remained with the club into his 47th year and the 2020-21 season, continuing to score with some regularity.
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Original:  Main Jhuth Nahin Bolta as Kavita Mhatre Devdas as Manorama (Paro's friend) Lajja as Lata Ho Sakta Hai as Snehal Jigyaasa as Neha Sharma Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi Kalpvriksh as Gurpreet Antardwand as Bhabhi Mimi as Doctor
Revised:  Main Jhuth Nahin Bolta as Kavita Mhatre Devdas as Manorama (Paro's friend) Lajja as Lata Ho Sakta Hai as Snehal Jigyaasa as Neha Sharma Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi Kalpvriksh as Gurpreet Antardwand as Bhabhi Mimi as Dr. Asha Desai
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Original:  Maharana Pratap - Mahamanga (2014) Gangaa - Sudha (2015–2017) Thapki Pyar Ki - Vasundhara 'Vasu' Balvinder Pandey (Dhruv and Kiran's mother/Bihaan's adoptive mother/Balvinder's wife) (2015–2017) Saab Ji (DD National, 2016) Badho Bahu as Sushma Bua Silsila Badalte Rishton Ka as Radhika Malhotra (Kunal's mother) (2018–2019) Delhi Crime Pinjra Khoobsurti Ka as Manjari Sanyalv (Omkar's mother) (2020–2021) Kaahin Kissii Roz Ramola Did Surgical Ashna Ashlesha Reborn Sunita 
Revised:  Maharana Pratap - Mahamanga (2014) Gangaa - Sudha (2015–2017) Thapki Pyar Ki - Vasundhara 'Vasu' Balvinder Pandey (Dhruv and Kiran's mother/Bihaan's adoptive mother/Balvinder's wife) (2015–2017) Saab Ji (DD National, 2016) Badho Bahu as Sushma Bua Silsila Badalte Rishton Ka as Radhika Malhotra (Kunal's mother) (2018–2019) Delhi Crime Pinjra Khoobsurti Ka as Manjari Sanyalv (Omkar's mother) (2020–2021) Kaahin Kissii Roz Ramola Did Surgical Ashna Ashlesha Reborn Sunita Thapki Pyar Ki 2 as 2021-present
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