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Original:  He served as Deputy Chief of the Army from 1982 to 1983 and as GOC South West Africa Territory Force from 1983 to 1987.
Revised:  He served as Deputy Chief of the Army from 1982 to 1983 and as GOC South West Africa Territorial Force from 1983 to 1987.
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Original:  He was later OC Far North Command, Deputy Chief of the Army again, Chief of the Army from 1990 to 1993, the last Chief of the SADF from 1993 to 1994, and the first Chief of the South African National Defence Force from 1994 to 1998.
Revised:  He was later GOC Far North Command, Deputy Chief of the Army again, Chief of the Army from 1990 to 1993, the last Chief of the SADF from 1993 to 1994, and the first Chief of the South African National Defence Force from 1994 to 1998.
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Original:  He was later OC Far North Command, Deputy Chief of the Army again, Chief of the Army from 1990 to 1993, the last Chief of the SADF from 1993 to 1994, and the first Chief of the South African National Defence Force from 1994 to 1998.
Revised:  He was later OC Far North Command, Deputy Chief of the Army again, Chief of the Army from 1990 to 1993, the last Chief of the South African Defence Force from 1993 to 1994, and the first Chief of the South African National Defence Force from 1994 to 1998.
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Original:  Controversy In February 1998, Georg Meiring in his capacity as the head of defense of South Africa had provided an intelligence report to then president Nelson Mandela on an organization by the name of "Front African People's Liberation Army".
Revised:  Controversy In February 1998, Meiring, in his capacity as the head of defense of South Africa had provided an intelligence report to then president Nelson Mandela on an organization by the name of "Front African People's Liberation Army".
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Original:  Controversy In February 1998, Georg Meiring in his capacity as the head of defense of South Africa had provided an intelligence report to then president Nelson Mandela on an organization by the name of "Front African People's Liberation Army".
Revised:  Controversy In February 1998, Georg Meiring in his capacity as the head of defence of South Africa had provided an intelligence report to then president Nelson Mandela on an organization by the name of "Front African People's Liberation Army".
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Original:  Controversy In February 1998, Georg Meiring in his capacity as the head of defense of South Africa had provided an intelligence report to then president Nelson Mandela on an organization by the name of "Front African People's Liberation Army".
Revised:  Controversy In February 1998, Georg Meiring in his capacity as the head of defense of South Africa had provided an intelligence report to President Nelson Mandela on an organization by the name of "Front African People's Liberation Army".
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Original:  Controversy In February 1998, Georg Meiring in his capacity as the head of defense of South Africa had provided an intelligence report to then president Nelson Mandela on an organization by the name of "Front African People's Liberation Army".
Revised:  Controversy In February 1998, Georg Meiring in his capacity as the head of defense of South Africa had provided an intelligence report to then president Nelson Mandela on an organisation by the name of "Front African People's Liberation Army".
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Original:  This report implicated many important government dignitaries on conspiracy to assassinate the president, murder judges, occupy Parliament and broadcasting stations and cause mayhem in general.
Revised:  This report implicated many important government dignitaries on conspiracy to assassinate the president, murder judges, occupy parliament and broadcasting stations and cause mayhem in general.
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Original:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan  See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War    
Revised:  Awards and decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War 
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Original:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan  See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War    
Revised:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 , Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War 
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Original:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan  See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War    
Revised:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War 
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Original:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan  See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War    
Revised:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa , Gold. He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War 
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Original:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan  See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War    
Revised:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan . See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War 
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Original:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan  See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War    
Revised:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan |- 
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Original:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan  See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War    
Revised:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War |- 
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Original:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan  See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War    
Revised:  Awards and Decorations In 1998 General Meiring was awarded the Order of the Star of South Africa (Gold) He also received the Order of the Cloud and Banner 4th class from Taiwan See also List of South African military chiefs South African Army South African Border War |-
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Original: General Georg Meiring (born 18 October 1939) was a South African military commander.
Revised: General Georg Meiring (born 18 October 1939) is a South African military commander.
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Original:  Namdev reproached him for having insulted Lord Sadashiva . Visoba asked Namdev to place his feet elsewhere, wherever Namdev placed Visoba's feet a Linga sprang up.
Revised:  Namdev reproached him for having insulted Shiva . Visoba asked Namdev to place his feet elsewhere, wherever Namdev placed Visoba's feet a Linga sprang up.
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Original:  He has also composed a manuscript called the Sansthal .
Revised:  He has also composed a metaohysical treatisecalled the Shatsthala .
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Original:  He has also composed a metaohysical treatisecalled the Shatsthala.
Revised:  He has also composed a metaphysical treatisecalled the Shatsthala.
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Original: Though described as a staunch Shaiva, Visoba wrote abhangs in praise of the god Vithoba, the patron-deity of the Varkari tradition.
Revised:  Visoba wrote abhangs in praise of the god Vithoba, the patron-deity of the Varkari tradition.
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Original:  Schomer p. 225-6 Visoba was a disciple of the Varkari poet-saint Jñāneśvar (c. 1275-1296).
Revised:  Visoba was a disciple of the Varkari poet-saint Jñāneśvar (c. 1275-1296).
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Original:  He has also composed a metaphysical treatisecalled the Shatsthala.
Revised:  He has also composed a metaphysical treatise called the Shatsthala.
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Original:  Ranade p. 189 Life Visoba either lived in Amvadhya or Barshi.
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Original:  Mahipati pp.152-6 Visoba had refused to acknowledge Jñāneśvar and Muktabai, but after knowing their spiritual greatness he became their disciple.
Revised:  Visoba had refused to acknowledge Jñāneśvar and Muktabai, but after knowing their spiritual greatness he became their disciple.
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Original:  Mahipati p. xxxvii According to the text Dnyandev Gatha, Jñāneśvar and Muktabai instructed Namdev to journey to Aundha Nagnath Temple in search of a proper guru.
Revised:  According to the text Dnyandev Gatha, Jñāneśvar and Muktabai instructed Namdev to journey to Aundha Nagnath Temple in search of a proper guru.
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Original:  Callewaert p. 19 Visoba wrote abhangs in praise of the god Vithoba, the patron-deity of the Varkari tradition.
Revised:  Visoba wrote abhangs in praise of the god Vithoba, the patron-deity of the Varkari tradition.
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Original:  Callewaert p. 35 Notes References The Sants By Karine Schomer, W. H. McLeod Mysticism in India By Ramchandra Dattatraya Ranade Stories of Indian Saints By Mahipati, Justin Edwards Abbott, Ganesh Vasudeo Tagare, Narhar Godbole Hindu Mysticism By S. N. Dasgupta The Hindi Padavali of Namdev By W. M. Callewaert, Lath M.
Revised:  Notes References The Sants By Karine Schomer, W. H. McLeod Mysticism in India By Ramchandra Dattatraya Ranade Stories of Indian Saints By Mahipati, Justin Edwards Abbott, Ganesh Vasudeo Tagare, Narhar Godbole Hindu Mysticism By S. N. Dasgupta The Hindi Padavali of Namdev By W. M. Callewaert, Lath M.
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Original:  Callewaert p. 35 Notes References The Sants By Karine Schomer, W. H. McLeod Mysticism in India By Ramchandra Dattatraya Ranade Stories of Indian Saints By Mahipati, Justin Edwards Abbott, Ganesh Vasudeo Tagare, Narhar Godbole Hindu Mysticism By S. N. Dasgupta The Hindi Padavali of Namdev By W. M. Callewaert, Lath M.
Revised:  Callewaert p. 35 References The Sants By Karine Schomer, W. H. McLeod Mysticism in India By Ramchandra Dattatraya Ranade Stories of Indian Saints By Mahipati, Justin Edwards Abbott, Ganesh Vasudeo Tagare, Narhar Godbole Hindu Mysticism By S. N. Dasgupta The Hindi Padavali of Namdev By W. M. Callewaert, Lath M.
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Original:  He preached the omnipresence of God and thus denounced idol-worship.
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Original: 2009 The second annual Blackoutsabbath concert with Wainwright and friends will take place on March 4, 2009 in City Winery in NYC.
Revised: 2009 The second annual Blackoutsabbath concert with Wainwright and friends , took place on March 4, 2009 in City Winery in NYC.
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Original:  at the Angel Orensanz Hall . Make plans for what you will do on the day of Blackout Sabbath (June 21), i.e. what you will cook ahead of time, who you will spend it with, etc.
Revised:  at the Angel Orensanz Center . Make plans for what you will do on the day of Blackout Sabbath (June 21), i.e. what you will cook ahead of time, who you will spend it with, etc.
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Original: Steps Following is a list of "steps" to take in order to participate in Blackoutsabbath (dates are geared towards the first celebration in 2008): Log onto the Blackout Sabbath site and check out the proposal and links.
Revised: Steps Following is a list of "steps" to take to participate in Blackoutsabbath (dates are geared towards the first celebration in 2008): Log onto the Blackout Sabbath site and check out the proposal and links.
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Original:  This exercise will be repeated the next year, at which point you can review your list and make a NEW one! 2009 The second annual Blackoutsabbath concert with Wainwright and friends, took place on March 4, 2009  in City Winery in NYC.
Revised:  This exercise will be repeated the next year, at which point you can review your list and make a NEW one! 2009 The second annual Blackoutsabbath concert with Wainwright and friends, took place on March 4, 2009 , in City Winery in NYC.
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Original:  2008 On June 16, Wainwright posted a message on his site reminding fans to participate on the first annual Blackoutsabbath ritual, which would take place on June 21, 2008  from noon to midnight around the world.
Revised:  2008 On June 16, Wainwright posted a message on his site reminding fans to participate on the first annual Blackoutsabbath ritual, which would take place on June 21, 2008 , from noon to midnight around the world.
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Original: | Tropical and subtropical coniferous forests are a forest biome.
Revised:  Tropical and subtropical coniferous forests are a forest biome.
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Original:  Most tropical and subtropical coniferous forest ecoregions are found in the Nearctic and Neotropic ecozones, from Delaware to Nicaragua and on the Greater Antilles, Bahamas, and Bermuda.
Revised:  Most tropical and subtropical coniferous forest ecoregions are found in the Nearctic and Neotropic ecozones, from the Mid-Atlantic states to Nicaragua and on the Greater Antilles, Bahamas, and Bermuda.
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Original:  They are located in regions of semi-humid climate at tropical and subtropical latitudes.
Revised:  They are located in regions of humid climate at tropical and subtropical latitudes.
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Original:  Tropical and subtropical coniferous forests are a forest biome.
Revised: Extent of Tropical and subtropical coniferous forest regions Tropical and subtropical coniferous forests are a forest biome.
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Original:  External links Tropical and subtropical coniferous forests
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Original: Tropical and subtropical coniferous forests are a tropical forest biome defined by the World Wide Fund for Nature.
Revised: Tropical and subtropical coniferous forests are a tropical forest habitat type defined by the World Wide Fund for Nature.
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Original:  They are located in regions of humid climate at tropical and subtropical latitudes .
Revised:  These forests are found predominantly in North and Central America and experience low levels of precipitation and moderate variability in temperature. Tropical and subtropical coniferous forests are characterized by diverse species of conifers, whose needles are adapted to deal with the variable climatic conditions .
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Original:   Outside the Americas and the Greater Ranges of Asia they are rare and predominate on islands .
Revised:  Many migratory birds and butterflies spend winter in tropical and subtropical conifer forests. This biome features a thick, closed canopy which blocks light to the floor and allows little underbrush. As a result, the ground is often covered with fungi and ferns. Shrubs and small trees compose a diverse understory .
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Original:  Most tropical and subtropical coniferous forest ecoregions are found in the Nearctic and Neotropic ecozones , from the Mid-Atlantic states to Nicaragua and on the Greater Antilles, Bahamas, and Bermuda.
Revised:  Most tropical and subtropical coniferous forest ecoregions are found in the Nearctic and Neotropical realms , from the Mid-Atlantic states to Nicaragua and on the Greater Antilles, Bahamas, and Bermuda.
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Original:  A normal response to going from standing to sitting will be an increased heart rate.
Revised:  A normal response to going from sitting to standing will be an increased heart rate.
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Original: Heart rate recovery, or HRR, is used as a fitness.
Revised: Heart rate recovery, or HRR, is used as measurement of fitness.
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Original:  A fit persons heart rate at the end of high levels of activity will drop down to the normal resting heart rate.
Revised:  A fit person's heart rate at the end of high levels of activity will drop down to the normal resting heart rate.
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Original:  If a persons HRR does not drop by the expected amount then they may be fatigued or have a high core temperature.
Revised:  If someone's HRR does not drop by the expected amount then they may be fatigued or have a high core temperature.
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Original:  Taking the first 30 seconds of rest period gives a value in number of beats per minute or bpm.
Revised:  Taking the first 30 seconds after exercise, then multiplying by two, gives number of beats per minute or bpm.
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Original:  A normal response to going from sitting to standing will be an increased heart rate .
Revised:  The heart rate normally increases when moving from a sitting to a standing position .
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Original:  HHR varies with fitness, and is gender and age specific, but an expected rate of recovery can be anticipated according to these variables.
Revised:  HRR varies with fitness, and is gender and age specific, but an expected rate of recovery can be anticipated according to these variables.
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Original:  The DIY ethic gives total control over the final product without need to compromise with record labels , or to have any musical ability .
Revised:  The DIY ethic gives total control over the final product without need to compromise with record labels .
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Original:  For example, punk impresario David Ferguson's CD Presents was a DIY concert production, recording studio, and record label network  
Revised:  For example, punk impresario David Ferguson's CD Presents was a DIY concert production, recording studio, and record label network . Film 
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Original:  By country Jugaad
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Original: Commercial DIY music has its origins in the mid 1970s punk rock scene .
Revised: Commercial DIY music has its origins in the mid 1970s punk rock subculture .
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Original:  By controlling the entire production and distribution chain, DIY music bands can develop a closer relationship between artists and fans.
Revised:  By controlling the entire production and distribution chain, DIY bands always can develop a closer relationship between artists and fans.
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Original:  In culture Music Commercial DIY music has its origins in the late 1970s punk rock subculture.
Revised:  Commercial DIY music has its origins in the late 1970s punk rock subculture.
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Original:  Riot grrrl, associated with third-wave feminism, also adopted the core values of the DIY punk ethic by leveraging creative ways of communication through zines and other projects.
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Original:  Pronounced community shifts to diatoms have been observed during fertilization, and it’s still unclear if the change in species composition has any long-term environmental effects      
Revised:  Pronounced community shifts to diatoms have been observed during fertilization, and it’s still unclear if the change in species composition has any long-term environmental effects . 
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Original:  Despite nitrogen availability in Equatorial Pacific waters, primary production and observed surface ocean biomass is considerably lower compared to other major upwelling regions of the ocean.
Revised:  Despite nitrogen availability in Equatorial Pacific waters, primary production and observed surface ocean biomass are considerably lower compared to other major upwelling regions of the ocean.
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Original:  During these glacial periods  the Equatorial Pacific increased its export of marine new production, thus providing a sink of atmospheric carbon dioxide.
Revised:  During these glacial periods , the Equatorial Pacific increased its export of marine new production, thus providing a sink of atmospheric carbon dioxide.
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Original:  Paleo-oceanographers currently challenge the Aeolian Dust hypothesis which suggests that the transport of atmospheric iron-rich  off Central and South America controls the intensity of primary production in the Equatorial Pacific.
Revised:  Paleo-oceanographers currently challenge the Aeolian Dust hypothesis which suggests that the atmospheric transport of iron-rich off Central and South America controls the intensity of primary production in the Equatorial Pacific.
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Original:  Paleo-oceanographers currently challenge the Aeolian Dust hypothesis which suggests that the transport of atmospheric iron-rich  off Central and South America controls the intensity of primary production in the Equatorial Pacific.
Revised:  Paleo-oceanographers currently challenge the Aeolian Dust hypothesis which suggests that the transport of atmospheric iron-rich dust off Central and South America controls the intensity of primary production in the Equatorial Pacific.
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Original:  Compared to the North Pacific and Southern Ocean, Equatorial Pacific waters have relatively low levels of biogenic silica and thus don't support significant standing stocks of diatoms  Picoplankton are the most abundant marine primary producers in these regions due mainly to their ability to assimilate low concentrations of trace metals.
Revised:  Compared to the North Pacific and Southern Ocean, Equatorial Pacific waters have relatively low levels of biogenic silica and thus do not support significant standing stocks of diatoms Picoplankton are the most abundant marine primary producers in these regions due mainly to their ability to assimilate low concentrations of trace metals.
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Original:  Compared to the North Pacific and Southern Ocean, Equatorial Pacific waters have relatively low levels of biogenic silica and thus don't support significant standing stocks of diatoms  Picoplankton are the most abundant marine primary producers in these regions due mainly to their ability to assimilate low concentrations of trace metals.
Revised:  Compared to the North Pacific and Southern Ocean, Equatorial Pacific waters have relatively low levels of biogenic silica and thus don't support significant standing stocks of diatoms . Picoplankton are the most abundant marine primary producers in these regions due mainly to their ability to assimilate low concentrations of trace metals.
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