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Original:  Zafra has further noted that police arson investigators and National Bureau of Investigation officials are in the site to probe the cause of the explosion.
Revised:  Zafra has further noted that police arson investigators and National Bureau of Investigation officials are on the site to probe the cause of the explosion.
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Original:  V/Line regional train services were also affected, with coaches replacing some trains and other services working to reduced linespeeds .
Revised:  V/Line regional train services were also affected, with coaches replacing some trains and other services working with reduced line-speeds .
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Original:  An X'Trapolis train operated by Connex pulls into Melbourne's Glenferrie railway station Connex has blamed the Australian Rail Tram and Bus Industry Union for 80\% of the cancellations, saying the drivers are running an "over-zealous, fault-finding protocol" leading to servicable trains becoming unavailable.
Revised:  An X'Trapolis train operated by Connex pulls into Melbourne's Glenferrie railway station Connex has blamed the Australian Rail Tram and Bus Industry Union for 80\% of the cancellations, saying the drivers are running an "over-zealous, fault-finding protocol" leading to serviceable trains becoming unavailable.
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Original:  She was recovered but suffering from severe injuries and died later in hospital 
Revised:  She was rescued from the water but had suffered from severe injuries and died later in hospital 
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Original:  Freeman and his wife Peta split up in 2007  
Revised:  Freeman and his wife , Peta, split in 2007. 
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Original:  They are believed to also be the children of Arthur Freeman.
Revised:  They are believed also to be the children of Arthur Freeman.
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Original: Starbucks Coffee are set to close 300 of there stores with the release of around 6,700 members of staff .
Revised: Starbucks Coffee are set to close 300 stores and lay off around 6,700 members of staff .
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Original: Starbucks Coffee are set to close 300 of there stores with the release of around 6,700 members of staff .
Revised: Starbucks Coffee are set to close 300 of there stores with the release of around 6,700 employees .
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Original:  The announcement came yesterday after around a 69\% drop in quarterly profits.
Revised:  The announcement came after a 69\% drop in quarterly profits.
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Original:  Starbucks chairman Howard Schultz sent a letter to the employees explaining the difficulties the company was having with the current economic climate , the financial crisis is affecting almost every company in the world he added .
Revised:  Starbucks chairman Howard Schultz sent a letter to employees explaining the difficulties the company was having with the current economic climate , the financial crisis is affecting almost every company in the world he added .
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Original:  Starbucks chairman Howard Schultz sent a letter to the employees explaining the difficulties the company was having with the current economic climate , the financial crisis is affecting almost every company in the world he added .
Revised:  Starbucks chairman Howard Schultz sent a letter to the employees explaining the difficulties the company was having in the current economic climate , the financial crisis is affecting almost every company in the world he added .
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Original:  Starbucks chairman Howard Schultz sent a letter to the employees explaining the difficulties the company was having with the current economic climate , the financial crisis is affecting almost every company in the world he added .
Revised:  Starbucks chairman Howard Schultz sent a letter to the employees explaining the difficulties the company was having with the current economic climate .
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Original:  He placed some of the blame of the loss in sales on other companies such as McDonalds and Dunkin’ Donuts improving the quality of there coffee.
Revised:  He placed some of the blame of the loss in sales on other companies such as McDonalds and Dunkin’ Donuts improving the quality of their coffee.
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Original:  Two thirds of the store closers are set to take place in the United States.
Revised:  Two-thirds of the store closers are set to take place in the United States.
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Original:  Two thirds of the store closers are set to take place in the United States.
Revised:  Two thirds of the store closures are to take place in the United States.
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Original:  Schultz ’ s salary would also be reduced to $10,000 a year according to the Wall Street Journal.
Revised:  Schultz ' s salary would also be reduced to $10,000 a year according to the Wall Street Journal.
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Original:  Starbucks has around 16,000 stores internationally with around 11,000 of them being in the U.S. There are around 172,000 employees in all areas of the company
Revised:  Starbucks has around 16,000 stores internationally with around 11,000 in the U.S. There are around 172,000 employees in all areas of the company
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Original: A Starbucks at the Shinbashi Yurikamome railway station in Tokyo Starbucks Coffee are set to close 300 stores and lay off around 6,700 employees.
Revised: A Starbucks at the Shinbashi Yurikamome railway station in Tokyo Starbucks Coffee is set to close 300 stores and lay off around 6,700 employees.
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Original:  The company took $64.3 million in the 13 trading weeks ending December, down from $ 208.1 million last year.
Revised:  The company only made a profit of $64.3 million in the 13 trading weeks ending in December, down from $ 208.1 million last year.
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Original:  Starbucks chairman Howard Schultz sent a letter to employees explaining the difficulties the company was having in the current economic climate.
Revised:  Starbucks chairman Howard Schultz sent a letter to employees explaining the difficulties the company is having in the current economic climate.
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Original:  He placed some of the blame of the loss in sales on other companies such as McDonalds and Dunkin’ Donuts  improving the quality of their coffee.
Revised:  He placed some of the blame of the loss in sales on other companies such as McDonalds and Dunkin’ Donuts , which have been improving the quality of their coffee.
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Original:  Two-thirds of the store closures are to take place in the United States.
Revised: "These decisions have been made to ensure the company is leaner and prepared to endure a worsening economic climate," said Schultz in the letter. Two-thirds of the store closures are to take place in the United States.
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Original: The southern African country of Zimbabwe has decided to abandon its currency, the Zimbabwean dollar, in favour of other currencies.
Revised:  Zimbabwe has decided to abandon its currency, the Zimbabwean dollar, in favour of other currencies.
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Original:  Acting Finance Minister Patrick Chinamasa made the announcment today, saying that Zimbabweans will be allowed to make transactions in other currencies along with the local currency.
Revised:  Acting Finance Minister Patrick Chinamasa announced that Zimbabweans will be allowed to make transactions in other currencies along with the local currency.
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Original:  "In line with the prevailing practices by the general public, [the] government is therefore allowing the use of multiple foreign currencies for business transactions alongside the Zimbabwean dollar," he said, adding that the Zimbabwean dollar will not be removed from circulation , only used alongside other currencies.
Revised:  "In line with the prevailing practices by the general public, [the] government is therefore allowing the use of multiple foreign currencies for business transactions alongside the Zimbabwean dollar," he said, adding that the Zimbabwean dollar will not be removed from circulation and would be used alongside other currencies.
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Original:  A 100 million dollar note, issued last yearThe announcment comes in the midst of one of the world's worst hyperinflations , which has significantly devalued the Zimbabwean dollar.
Revised:  A 100 million dollar note, issued last year This decision comes during the current period of hyperinflation , which has significantly devalued the Zimbabwean dollar.
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Original:  Banknotes of up to 100 trillion in the currency have been printed, despite the government's removing ten zeroes off the end of its currency last summer to try and make transactions easier.
Revised:  Banknotes upto 100 trillion in the currency have been printed, despite the government's removing ten zeroes off the end of its currency last summer to try and make transactions easier.
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Original:  Banknotes of up to 100 trillion in the currency have been printed, despite the government's removing ten zeroes off the end of its currency last summer to try and make transactions easier.
Revised:  Banknotes of up to 100 trillion have been printed, despite the government's removing ten zeroes off the end of its currency last summer to try and make transactions easier.
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Original:  Banknotes of up to 100 trillion in the currency have been printed, despite the government's removing ten zeroes off the end of its currency last summer to try and make transactions easier.
Revised:  Banknotes of up to 100 trillion in the currency have been printed, despite the removal of ten zeroes from the currency last summer to try and make transactions easier.
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Original:  Banknotes of up to 100 trillion in the currency have been printed, despite the government's removing ten zeroes off the end of its currency last summer to try and make transactions easier.
Revised:  Banknotes of up to 100 trillion in the currency have been printed, despite the government's removing ten zeroes off the end of its currency last summer to try to make transactions easier.
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Original:  The official inflation rate, last updated in July of last year, is 231,000,000 percent per annum , although independent estimates place the number as high as 6.5x10108.
Revised:  The official inflation rate, last updated in July of last year, is 231,000,000 \% a year , although independent estimates place the number as high as 6.5x10108.
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Original:  Up to now , only vendors with licenses were legally able to accept foreign currencies, although the practice was widespread -- most businesses refused to accept the unstable Zimbabwean dollar.
Revised:  Up to now only vendors with licenses were legally able to accept foreign currencies, although the practice was widespread -- most businesses refused to accept the unstable Zimbabwean dollar.
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Original:  Up to now , only vendors with licenses were legally able to accept foreign currencies, although the practice was widespread -- most businesses refused to accept the unstable Zimbabwean dollar.
Revised:  Up to now , only vendors with licenses were legally able to accept foreign currencies, although the practice was widespread -- private businesses refused to accept the unstable Zimbabwean dollar.
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Original:  Many people, among them teachers and doctors, have gone on strike due to the hyperinflation , saying that their salaries, which are measured in the trillions of Zimbabwean dollars, are insufficient to pay for even the bus fare to get to work.
Revised:  Large sections of the workforce, including teachers and doctors, have gone on strike due to the hyperinflation , saying that their salaries, which are measured in the trillions of Zimbabwean dollars, are insufficient to pay for even the bus fare to get to work.
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Original:  Many people, among them teachers and doctors, have gone on strike due to the hyperinflation , saying that their salaries, which are measured in the trillions of Zimbabwean dollars, are insufficient to pay for even the bus fare to get to work.
Revised:  Many people, among them teachers and doctors, have gone on strike because hyperinflation rendered their wages worthless. Representative groups said salaries, now measured in trillions of dollars, are insufficient to pay for even the bus fare to get to work.
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Original:  Many people, among them teachers and doctors, have gone on strike due to the hyperinflation , saying that their salaries, which are measured in the trillions of Zimbabwean dollars, are insufficient to pay for even the bus fare to get to work.
Revised:  Many people, among them teachers and doctors, have gone on strike due to the hyperinflation , saying that their salaries, which are measured in the trillions of Zimbabwean dollars, are insufficient to pay for the bus fare to get to work.
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Original:  Many people, among them teachers and doctors, have gone on strike due to the hyperinflation , saying that their salaries, which are measured in the trillions of Zimbabwean dollars, are insufficient to pay for even the bus fare to get to work.
Revised:  Many people, among them teachers and doctors, have gone on strike due to the hyperinflation , saying that their salaries, which are measured in the trillions of Zimbabwean dollars, are insufficient to pay for even the bus fare to work.
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Original:  Apart from its devastated economy, Zimbabwe is also facing several other crises, not least of which is a cholera epidemic , which has claimed the lives of over 3,000 people, according to statistics from the World Health Organisation
Revised:  Zimbabwe also faces other crises, not least of which is a cholera epidemic , which has claimed the lives of over 3,000 people, according to statistics from the World Health Organisation
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Original:  Apart from its devastated economy, Zimbabwe is also facing several other crises, not least of which is a cholera epidemic , which has claimed the lives of over 3,000 people, according to statistics from the World Health Organisation
Revised:  Apart from its devastated economy, Zimbabwe is also facing several other crises, including a cholera epidemic , which has claimed the lives of over 3,000 people, according to statistics from the World Health Organisation
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Original:  Apart from its devastated economy, Zimbabwe is also facing several other crises, not least of which is a cholera epidemic , which has claimed the lives of over 3,000 people, according to statistics from the World Health Organisation
Revised:  Apart from its devastated economy, Zimbabwe is also facing several other crises, not least of which is a cholera epidemic that has claimed the lives of over 3,000 people, according to statistics from the World Health Organisation
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Original:  Apple recently announced that it would begin using Intel x86 microprocessors in its computers next year, opening the door to the possibilty of Mac OS X running on PCs, which have traditionally run only Microsoft or GNU/Linux operating systems.
Revised:  Apple recently announced that it would begin using Intel x86 microprocessors in its computers next year, 
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Original:  Dell already offers servers running GNU/Linux rather than Microsoft Windows.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Steve Jobs, the chief executive officer of Apple, has stated that he does not want to see Apple software running on anything but Apple hardware, and Apple plans to prevent people from installing future versions of OS X on non-Apple computers
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% but has continued to deny reports that they will allow their OS to be run on non-Apple computers
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Steve Jobs, the chief executive officer of Apple, has stated that he does not want to see Apple software running on anything but Apple hardware, and Apple plans to prevent people from installing future versions of OS X on non-Apple computers
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Steve Jobs, the chief executive officer of Apple, has stated that he does not want to see Apple software running on anything but Apple hardware, and Apple plans to prevent people from installing future versions of OS X on non-Apple hardware
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Original:  Apple recently announced that it would begin using Intel x86 microprocessors in its computers next year, but has continued to deny reports that they will allow their OS to be run on non-Apple hardware  
Revised:  Apple recently announced that it would begin using Intel x86 microprocessors in its computers next year, but has continued to deny reports that they will allow their OS to be run on non-Apple hardware . 
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Original: The US trade deficit has increased to its highest-ever level , $195.1bn (£107bn) in the first quarter of 2005, according to preliminary US Commerce Department figures.
Revised: The United States trade deficit has increased to its highest-ever level , $195.1bn (£107bn) in the first quarter of 2005, according to preliminary US Commerce Department figures.
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Original:  The last quarter of 2004 saw a deficit of $ 188.4 bn .
Revised:  The last quarter of 2004 saw a deficit of $ 188.4 billion .
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Original:  The deficit on goods increased from $182.2bn to $ 186.3 bn , as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods and consumer products.
Revised:  The deficit on goods increased from $182.2 billion to $ 186.3 bn , as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods and consumer products.
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Original:  The deficit on goods increased from $182.2bn to $ 186.3 bn , as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods and consumer products.
Revised:  The deficit on goods increased from $182.2bn to $ 186.3 billion , as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods and consumer products.
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Original: The United States trade deficit has increased to its highest level yet: $195.1 billion (£161 billion) in the first quarter of 2005, according to preliminary U.S. Commerce Department figures.
Revised: The United States trade deficit increased to its highest level yet: $195.1 billion (£161 billion) in the first quarter of 2005, according to preliminary U.S. Commerce Department figures.
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Original:  The new record-breaking deficit represents 6.4 \% of the US's gross national product, again an increase on last-quarter 2004 - up 0.1 \% . The deficit on goods increased from $182.2 billion to $186.3 billion, as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods  and consumer products.
Revised:  The new record-breaking deficit represents 6.4 percent of the US's gross national product, again an increase on last-quarter 2004 - up 0.1 \% . The deficit on goods increased from $182.2 billion to $186.3 billion, as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods and consumer products.
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Original:  The new record-breaking deficit represents 6.4 \% of the US's gross national product, again an increase on last-quarter 2004 - up 0.1 \% . The deficit on goods increased from $182.2 billion to $186.3 billion, as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods  and consumer products.
Revised:  The new record-breaking deficit represents 6.4 \% of the US's gross national product, again an increase on last-quarter 2004 - up 0.1 percent . The deficit on goods increased from $182.2 billion to $186.3 billion, as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods and consumer products.
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Original:  The new record-breaking deficit represents 6.4 \% of the US's gross national product, again an increase on last-quarter 2004 - up 0.1 \% . The deficit on goods increased from $182.2 billion to $186.3 billion, as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods  and consumer products.
Revised:  The new record-breaking deficit represents 6.4 \% of the US's gross national product, again an increase on last-quarter 2004 - up 0.1 \% . The deficit on goods increased from $182.2 billion to $186.3 billion, as imports of goods increased more than exports, particularly in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods and consumer products.
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Original:  The new record-breaking deficit represents 6.4 \% of the US's gross national product, again an increase on last-quarter 2004 - up 0.1 \% . The deficit on goods increased from $182.2 billion to $186.3 billion, as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods  and consumer products.
Revised:  The new record-breaking deficit represents 6.4 \% of the US's gross national product, again an increase on last-quarter 2004 - up 0.1 \% . The deficit on goods increased from $182.2 billion to $186.3 billion, as imports of goods increased more than exports, particulary in industrial supplies and materials, capital goods , and consumer products.
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Original:  It is believed that China's economic boom is partly to blame, with the country exporting to the US . Analysts have expressed concern at the findings, with Allan Seychuk, an economist at RBC Capital Markets, saying "This is not the direction markets were hoping to see for the mammoth current account deficit.
Revised:  It is believed that China's economic boom is partly to blame, with the country exporting to the US . Analysts expressed concern at the findings, with Allan Seychuk, an economist at RBC Capital Markets, saying "This is not the direction markets were hoping to see for the mammoth current account deficit.
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Original:  The US dollar has lost a great deal of ground because markets are uncomfortable with a deficit that has now reached record levels.
Revised:  The U.S. dollar has lost a great deal of ground because markets are uncomfortable with a deficit that has now reached record levels.
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Original:  In a statement today, Senior Investigating Officer Detective Superintendent Mike Veale named Hugo Quintas aged 23 of Seymour Court, Trowbridge, former boyfriend of Hayley Richards, as being wanted for her murder;
Revised: Hugo Quintas In a statement today, Senior Investigating Officer Detective Superintendent Mike Veale named Hugo Quintas aged 23 of Seymour Court, Trowbridge, former boyfriend of Hayley Richards, as being wanted for her murder;
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Original: Hugo Quintas In a statement today, Senior Investigating Officer Detective Superintendent Mike Veale named Hugo Quintas aged 23 of Seymour Court, Trowbridge, former boyfriend of Hayley Richards, as being wanted for her murder;
Revised:  In a statement today, Senior Investigating Officer Detective Superintendent Mike Veale named Hugo Quintas aged 23 of Seymour Court, Trowbridge, former boyfriend of Hayley Richards, as being wanted for her murder;
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Original: Hayley Richards DS Veale also released a photograph of Quintas for publication and broadcast, and appealed for help from the public in connection with a car, an L-registered black Rover 200 SLI, which is now in the possession of the Wiltshire constabulary.
Revised:  DS Veale also released a photograph of Quintas for publication and broadcast, and appealed for help from the public in connection with a car, an L-registered black Rover 200 SLI, which is now in the possession of the Wiltshire constabulary.
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