wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), “ Nabalitokan a Tawid ” (2011), "Karapote, Antolohia Dagiti 13 a Nasuerte a Sarita" (2011), "Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), “ Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano (2012) Short Stories:
Revised:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), " Nabalitokan a Tawid ” (2011), "Karapote, Antolohia Dagiti 13 a Nasuerte a Sarita" (2011), "Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), “ Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano (2012) Short Stories:
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Original:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), “ Nabalitokan a Tawid ” (2011), "Karapote, Antolohia Dagiti 13 a Nasuerte a Sarita" (2011), "Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), “ Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano (2012) Short Stories:
Revised:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), “ Nabalitokan a Tawid " (2011), "Karapote, Antolohia Dagiti 13 a Nasuerte a Sarita" (2011), "Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), “ Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano (2012) Short Stories:
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), “ Nabalitokan a Tawid ” (2011), "Karapote, Antolohia Dagiti 13 a Nasuerte a Sarita" (2011), "Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), “ Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano (2012) Short Stories:
Revised:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), “ Nabalitokan a Tawid ” (2011), "Karapote, Antolohia Dagiti 13 a Nasuerte a Sarita" (2011), "Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), " Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano (2012) Short Stories:
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Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  " Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, " “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, " “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, " “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, " “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, " “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, " “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, " “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ' Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry '," Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, " “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, " “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, " “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, " “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, " “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, " “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, " “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, " Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, " “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ ’Ninoy’ ”
Revised:  “ Dung-aw, ” “Sudario, ” “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, ” “Eman, ” “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, ” “Maris ti Birhen, ” “Littugaw, ” “ ’ Tom & Jerry ’,” Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, ” “Tapingaran, ” “Voice Tape, ” “Karapote, ” “Riting, ” “Ti Balay, ” “Saddam, ” “Taraqui, ” Ti Mision ni Asiong, ” “ 'Ninoy' ”
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Ariel S. Tabag (born August 16, 1978), is a bilingual Ilokano fictionist (he writes in Ilokano language and Tagalog/Filipino), poet, editor, translator, and musician.
Revised: Ariel S. Tabag (born August 16, 1978), is a bilingual Ilocano fictionist (he writes in Ilokano language and Tagalog/Filipino), poet, editor, translator, and musician.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Ariel S. Tabag (born August 16, 1978), is a bilingual Ilokano fictionist (he writes in Ilokano language and Tagalog/Filipino), poet, editor, translator, and musician.
Revised: Ariel S. Tabag (born August 16, 1978), is a bilingual Ilokano fictionist (he writes in Ilocano language and Tagalog/Filipino), poet, editor, translator, and musician.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He has received awards from Ilokano literary contests such as AMMAFLA, GUMIL California, SABALI, RFAAFIL, ATILA, Tugade Awards.
Revised:  He has received awards from Ilocano literary contests such as AMMAFLA, GUMIL California, SABALI, RFAAFIL, ATILA, Tugade Awards.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He is the author of Karapote (Curion), an anthology of Ilokano short stories.
Revised:  He is the author of Karapote (Curion), an anthology of Ilocano short stories.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  With Mighty C. Rasing, another Ilokano writer-musician, they started Danirock, a poetry performance with rock music.
Revised:  With Mighty C. Rasing, another Ilocano writer-musician, they started Danirock, a poetry performance with rock music.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  As a musician, he plays bass guitar for the underground band Pilo and the Ilocano rock band Manong Diego (formerly Samtoy).
Revised:  As a musician, he was a bassist for the underground band Pilo and the Ilocano rock band Manong Diego (formerly Samtoy).
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), "Nabalitokan a Tawid" (2011), " Karapote, Antolohia Dagiti 13 a Nasuerte a Sarita" (2011), " Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), "Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano  (2012) Short Stories:
Revised:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), "Nabalitokan a Tawid" (2011), " Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), "Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano (2012) Short Stories:
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), "Nabalitokan a Tawid" (2011), " Karapote, Antolohia Dagiti 13 a Nasuerte a Sarita" (2011), " Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), "Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano  (2012) Short Stories:
Revised:  "29 a Napili a Sarita iti Iluko" (2010), "Kastoy nga Imbunubonmi Dagiti Balikas" (2010), "Nabalitokan a Tawid" (2011), " Karapote, Antolohia Dagiti 13 a Nasuerte a Sarita" (2011), " Samtoy, Ang Aming Mga Kuwento" (2011), "Alimpatok, Antolohia Dagiti Erotiko a Daniw Dagiti Ilokano " (2012) Short Stories:
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "Dung-aw, " “Sudario ,  " “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, " “Eman , " “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, " “Maris ti Birhen , " “Littugaw, " “'Tom Jerry' , " Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, " “Tapingaran, " “Voice Tape," “Karapote , " “Riting, " “Ti Balay," “Saddam," “Taraqui," Ti Mision ni Asiong," “'Ninoy'” Awards Palanca Awards Talaang Ginto-Gantimpalang Collantes,  Komisyon sa Wikang Filipino Reynald F.
Revised:  "Dung-aw, " “Sudario , , " “1001 a Kalsada iti Siudad, " “Eman , " “Dagiti Samiweng ti Angin, " “Maris ti Birhen , " “Littugaw, " “'Tom Jerry' , " Dagiti Ayup iti Bantay Quimmallugong, " “Tapingaran, " “Voice Tape," “Karapote , " “Riting, " “Ti Balay," “Saddam," “Taraqui," Ti Mision ni Asiong," “'Ninoy'” Awards Palanca Awards Talaang Ginto-Gantimpalang Collantes, Komisyon sa Wikang Filipino Reynald F.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Ariel S. Tabag (born August 16, 1978), is a bilingual Ilocano fictionist (he writes in Ilocano language and Tagalog/Filipino), poet, editor, translator, and musician.
Revised: Ariel Sotelo Tabág (born August 16, 1978), is a bilingual Ilocano fictionist (he writes in Ilocano language and Tagalog/Filipino), poet, editor, translator, and musician.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Awards burat award* Talaang Ginto-Gantimpalang Collantes, Komisyon sa Wikang Filipino Reynald F.
Revised: Awards Talaang Ginto-Gantimpalang Collantes, Komisyon sa Wikang Filipino Reynald F.
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Original:  p. 197 Arriving on 29 January with 22 war canoes and 1,500 foot soldiers from different parts of the Ijo nation ,Sir W. Geary, Nigeria under British Rule ( 1927), p. 196 equipped with heavy guns, Koko capturedthe base with the loss of some forty lives, including twenty-four Company employees, destroyed warehouses and machinery, and took about sixty white men hostage, as well as carrying away a large quantity of booty, including money, trade goods, ammunition and a quick-firing gun.
Revised:  p. 197 Arriving on 29 January with 22 war canoes and 1,500 foot soldiers from different parts of the Ijo nation ,Sir W. Geary, Nigeria under British Rule ( 1927), p. 196 equipped with heavy guns, Koko capturedthe base with the loss of some forty lives, including twenty-four Company employees, destroyed warehouses and machinery, and took about sixty white men hostage, as well as carrying away a large quantity of booty, including money, trade goods, ammunition and a quick-firing gun.
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Original:  Sir W. Geary, Nigeria under British Rule (1927), p. 196 Koko then sought to negotiate with the Company for the release of the hostages, his price being a return to free trading conditions,Alfred Vingoe 1869-1954 A Full and Varied Life at tripod.com, accessed 25 September 2012 and on 2 February he wrote to Sir Claude MacDonald, the British consul-general, that he had no quarrel with the Queen but only with the Niger Company.
Revised:  Koko then sought to negotiate with the Company for the release of the hostages, his price being a return to free trading conditions,Alfred Vingoe 1869-1954 A Full and Varied Life at tripod.com, accessed 25 September 2012 and on 2 February he wrote to Sir Claude MacDonald, the British consul-general, that he had no quarrel with the Queen but only with the Niger Company.
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Original:  Following a report on the Nembe uprising by Sir John Kirk which was published in March 1896, finding that forty-three of his hostages had been murdered and ceremoniously eaten, Koko was offered a settlement of his grievances but found the terms unacceptable, so was deposed by the British.
Revised:  Following a report on the Nembe uprising by Sir John Kirk which was published in March 1896, finding that forty-three of Koko's hostages had been murdered and ceremoniously eaten, Koko was offered a settlement of his grievances but found the terms unacceptable, so was deposed by the British.
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Original: In popular culture In his Doctor Dolittle books , Hugh Lofting (1886–1947) created the West African kingdom of Fantippo, ruled over by a king named Koko.
Revised: In popular culture In his Doctor Dolittle books , Hugh Lofting created the West African kingdom of Fantippo, ruled over by a king named Koko.
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Original: Mogens Herman Hansen, A comparative study of thirty city-state cultures: an investigation (Kgl. Danske Videnskabernes Selskab, 2000, ), p. 534  Admiral Bedford, who routed Koko's forces in 1895 HMS Thrush, one of Bedford's ships By the 1890s, there was intense resentment of the Company's treatment of the people of the Niger delta and of its aggressive actions to exclude its competitors and to monopolize trade, denying the men of Nembe the access to markets which they had long enjoyed.
Revised: Mogens Herman Hansen, A comparative study of thirty city-state cultures: an investigation (Kgl. Danske Videnskabernes Selskab, 2000, ), p. 534 Admiral Bedford, whorouted Koko's forces in 1895 HMS Thrush, one of Bedford's ships By the 1890s, there was intense resentment of the Company's treatment of the people of the Niger delta and of its aggressive actions to exclude its competitors and to monopolize trade, denying the men of Nembe the access to markets which they had long enjoyed.
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Original:   Sir Claude MacDonald, British consul-general at Brass Koko then sought to negotiate with the Company for the release of the hostages, his price being a return to free trading conditions,Alfred Vingoe 1869-1954 A Full and Varied Life at tripod.com, accessed 25 September 2012 and on 2 February he wrote to Sir Claude MacDonald, the British consul-general, that he had no quarrel with the Queen but only with the Niger Company.
Revised:  180px| Sir Claude MacDonald, British consul-general at Brass Koko then sought to negotiate with the Company for the release of the hostages, his price being a return to free trading conditions,Alfred Vingoe 1869-1954 A Full and Varied Life at tripod.com, accessed 25 September 2012 and on 2 February he wrote to Sir Claude MacDonald, the British consul-general, that he had no quarrel with the Queen but only with the Niger Company.
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