wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace , starting from second place after Räikkönen, as it 's engine burnt in the mid-race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into the wall of tyres in the race.
Revised:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace . Having started from second place after Räikkönen, as it 's engine burnt in the mid-race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into the wall of tyres in the race.
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Original:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace , starting from second place after Räikkönen, as it 's engine burnt in the mid-race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into the wall of tyres in the race.
Revised:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace , starting from second place after Räikkönen, the car 's engine burnt in the mid-race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into the wall of tyres in the race.
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Original:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace , starting from second place after Räikkönen, as it 's engine burnt in the mid-race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into the wall of tyres in the race.
Revised:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace , starting from second place after Räikkönen, as it 's engine failed midway through the race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into the wall of tyres in the race.
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Original:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace , starting from second place after Räikkönen, as it 's engine burnt in the mid-race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into the wall of tyres in the race.
Revised:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace , starting from second place after Räikkönen, as it 's engine burnt in the mid-race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into a wall of tyres in the race.
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Original:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace , starting from second place after Räikkönen, as it 's engine burnt in the mid-race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into the wall of tyres in the race.
Revised:  Fernando Alonso's Renault couldn't mantain the high pace , starting from second place after Räikkönen, as it 's engine burnt in the mid-race . McLaren Mercedes drivers took the third row in qualification, but Heikki Kovalainen suffered a full speed crash into the wall of tyres during the race.
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Original:  His teammate Lewis Hamilton gained third place after Ferrari's . Robert Kubica made earned 5 points for BMW Sauber finishing within an attack distance after Hamilton.
Revised:  His teammate Lewis Hamilton gained third place after Ferrari's . Robert Kubica made earned 5 points for BMW Sauber finishing immediatly after Hamilton.
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Original:  Rest of the top eight lose more than 30 secs to the leader
Revised:  The rest of the cars to finnish did so more than 30 secs to the leader
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Original:  One of the children, one  a set of twins born in 1996, died of neglect shortly after birth and the body was burned by the father.
Revised:  One of the children, one of a set of twins born in 1996, died of neglect shortly after birth and the body was burned by the father.
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Original:  Itcould eventually be used for manned missions using the SpaceX Dragon spacecraft.
Revised:  It could eventually be used for manned missions using the SpaceX Dragon spacecraft.
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Original:  Workers under Local 113 of the Amalgamated Transit Union suddenly walked off the job on Friday after rejecting a previous contract deal made the previous weekend  
Revised:  Workers under Local 113 of the Amalgamated Transit Union suddenly walked off the job on Friday after rejecting a previous contract deal made the previous weekend . 
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Original: The provincial government met in an extraordinary Sunday afternoon session to pass  the Toronto Public Transit Service Resumption Act, 2008 which calls for follow-up arbitration and mediation to resolve outstanding disagreements between Toronto Transit Commission management and its unions.
Revised: The provincial legislature met in an extraordinary Sunday afternoon session to pass the Toronto Public Transit Service Resumption Act, 2008 which calls for follow-up arbitration and mediation to resolve outstanding disagreements between Toronto Transit Commission management and its unions.
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Original: The provincial government met in an extraordinary Sunday afternoon session to pass  the Toronto Public Transit Service Resumption Act, 2008 which calls for follow-up arbitration and mediation to resolve outstanding disagreements between Toronto Transit Commission management and its unions.
Revised: The provincial government met in an extraordinary Sunday afternoon session to pass the Toronto Public Transit Service Resumption Act, 2008 which calls for follow-up arbitration and mediation to resolve outstanding disagreements between transit management and its unions.
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Original:  The largest union affected is Local 113 of the Amalgamated Transit Union, with the legislation also affecting workers unionised under International Association of Machinists and Aerospace Workers Lodge 235, and the Canadian Union of Public Employees Local 2
Revised:  The largest union affected is Local 113 of the Amalgamated Transit Union, but the legislation also affecting workers unionised under International Association of Machinists and Aerospace Workers Lodge 235, and the Canadian Union of Public Employees Local 2
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Original:  The largest union affected is Local 113 of the Amalgamated Transit Union, with the legislation also affecting workers unionised under International Association of Machinists and Aerospace Workers Lodge 235, and the Canadian Union of Public Employees Local 2
Revised:  The largest union affected is Local 113 of the Amalgamated Transit Union, with the legislation also affects workers unionised under International Association of Machinists and Aerospace Workers Lodge 235, and the Canadian Union of Public Employees Local 2
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Original: The provincial legislature met in an extraordinary Sunday afternoon session to pass Bill 66, the Toronto Public Transit Service Resumption Act, 2008 which not only orders the transit work to resume, but includes follow-up arbitration and mediation to resolve outstanding disagreements between transit management and its unions.
Revised: The provincial legislature met in an extraordinary Sunday afternoon session to pass Bill 66, the Toronto Public Transit Service Resumption Act, 2008 which not only orders the transit work to resume, but includes follow-up arbitration to resolve outstanding disagreements between transit management and its unions.
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Original: Union members who defy this law could be fined CAD$2000 per day, while the union itself would risk a daily fine of CAD$ 25,000.
Revised: Union members who defy this law could be fined C$2000 per day, while the union itself would risk a daily fine of C$ 25,000.
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Original:  Several people celebrating a wedding have also been trapped by the fire but are not injured and autorities say they are in no danger from the blaze.
Revised:  Several people celebrating a wedding have also been trapped by the fire but are not injured and authorities say they are in no danger from the blaze.
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Original:  It could take at lest five days before the fire can be brought under full control
Revised:  It could take at least five days before the fire can be brought under full control
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Original:  His son, who was the factory's manager, was also arrested   
Revised:  His son, who was the factory's manager, was also arrested . 
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Original:  He said a short circuit on the ground floor, which was filled with power saws, triggered the disaster  
Revised:  He said a short circuit on the ground floor, which was filled with power saws, triggered the disaster . 
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Original:  God saved me but I'll never forget those who died.  
Revised:  God saved me but I'll never forget those who died. " 
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Original:  The father of deceased 19-year-old Abdelazziz Darif said his son was paid 250 dirhams (20 euros /31 US dollars) per week and did not have social insurance  
Revised:  The father of deceased 19-year-old Abdelazziz Darif said his son was paid 250 dirhams (20 euro /31 US dollars) per week and did not have social insurance 
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Original:  The father of deceased 19-year-old Abdelazziz Darif said his son was paid 250 dirhams (20 euros /31 US dollars) per week and did not have social insurance  
Revised:  The father of deceased 19-year-old Abdelazziz Darif said his son was paid 250 dirhams (20 euros /31 US dollars) per week and did not have social insurance . 
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Original:   It's a building with a ground floor and three upper floors specialising in making furniture, therefore there were highly inflammable products," said Taouil.
Revised:  " It's a building with a ground floor and three upper floors specialising in making furniture, therefore there were highly inflammable products," said Taouil.
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Original: This is the 21th orbital launch of 2008, and the second to be conducted by a PSLV.
Revised: This is the 21st orbital launch of 2008, and the second to be conducted by a PSLV.
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Original:  A number of Russian and American rockets have launched more satellites.
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Original:  This is the most satellites ever launched by an Indian rocket, however Indian news agencies have been incorrectly claiming that it is the most satellites ever launched by a single rocket.
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Original: A : Europe and America.
Revised: Orange : Europe and America.
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Original:  A : It was considered as a bad sport and not well-known in public opinion in Taiwan.
Revised:  Orange : It was considered as a bad sport and not well-known in public opinion in Taiwan.
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Original:  Q: In what opportunities did you become a commentator from a wrestling fan?
Revised:  In what opportunities did you become a commentator from a wrestling fan?
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Original:  A: generally , I'm not a notable person, I just use the media as a promotion tool because we [the public] can't look down the strengths and impacts of public opinions and mass media.
Revised:  Orange: Generally , I'm not a notable person, I just use the media as a promotion tool because we [the public] can't look down the strengths and impacts of public opinions and mass media.
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Original:  Q: Undergoing with trendy changes of wrestling?
Revised:  Undergoing with trendy changes of wrestling?
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Original:  A : I met those opportunities coincidentally because when no one want to do it, and senior elites from media industry may not spare time to do production.
Revised:  Orange : I met those opportunities coincidentally because when no one want to do it, and senior elites from media industry may not spare time to do production.
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Original:  Q: Before (its) production, what's your opinion on similar programs especially in Chinese-language?
Revised:  Before (its) production, what's your opinion on similar programs especially in Chinese-language?
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Original:  A : It's difficult or impossible for a broadcaster to produce their own and significant program because the public opinion have their wrong bias on wrestling.
Revised:  Orange : It's difficult or impossible for a broadcaster to produce their own and significant program because the public opinion have their wrong bias on wrestling.
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Original:  Q: Generally OK.
Revised:  Generally OK.
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Original:  A : There were several feature or significant matches in their own years.
Revised:  Orange : There were several feature or significant matches in their own years.
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Original:  Q: Back to the topic of wrestling in Taiwan, besides of media, which tool will you use to promote it?
Revised:  Back to the topic of wrestling in Taiwan, besides of media, which tool will you use to promote it?
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Original:  A : The Internet - another media, a better way differ than mass media.
Revised:  Orange : The Internet - another media, a better way differ than mass media.
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Original:  Q: If promoted via a portal of "citizen journalism"?
Revised:  If promoted via a portal of "citizen journalism"?
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Original:  A : Really, that's a very better way to promote it because when connecting the Internet, the public frequently read topics related to current events like politics, society, and entertainment, focused by mass media and differ than what the common people need to know like some incidents just happened in their peripheral areas.
Revised:  Orange : Really, that's a very better way to promote it because when connecting the Internet, the public frequently read topics related to current events like politics, society, and entertainment, focused by mass media and differ than what the common people need to know like some incidents just happened in their peripheral areas.
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Original:  Q: Finally, do you have any expectation on wrestling in Taiwan.
Revised:  Finally, do you have any expectation on wrestling in Taiwan.
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Original:  A : We [the wrestlers and wrestling fans] hope the common bias of "violence" can be properly corrected.
Revised:  Orange : We [the wrestlers and wrestling fans] hope the common bias of "violence" can be properly corrected.
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Original:  Roughly to say, DON'T TRY THIS AT HOME. Q: OK, nice thanks for "Mr. Orange" in this interview
Revised:  Roughly to say, DON'T TRY THIS AT HOME. OK, nice thanks for "Mr. Orange" in this interview
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Original:  Its topics mostly related to Japanese and American  (e.g. World Wrestling Entertainment, New Japan Pro Wrestling, etc.) are often discussed on the Internet.
Revised:  Its topics mostly linked with Japanese and (e.g. World Wrestling Entertainment, New Japan Pro Wrestling, etc.) are often discussed on the Internet.
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Original:  Its topics mostly linked with Japanese and American  (e.g. World Wrestling Entertainment, New Japan Pro Wrestling, etc.)  are often discussed on the Internet.
Revised:  Its topics mostly linked with Japanese and American federations (e.g. World Wrestling Entertainment, New Japan Pro Wrestling, etc.) are often discussed on the Internet.
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Original:  Progressively, TV programs related to pro-wrestling became a focus by spectators and mass media world-wide not only in Japan, America, and Europe.
Revised:  As such, television programs and other mass media focused on pro-wrestling became a focus by spectators and mass media world-wide not only in Japan, America, and Europe.
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Original:  Progressively, TV programs related to pro-wrestling became a focus by spectators and mass media world-wide not only in Japan, America, and Europe.
Revised:  Progressively, TV programs related to pro-wrestling are commonplace in Japan, America, and Europe.
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Original:  In Taiwan, not only basic consumers watched TV shows and discussed via the Internet, but some of them participated its sport (wrestling ) through communities from the Internet or colleges.
Revised:  In Taiwan, fans do not simply watch the TV shows and discussed via the Internet, but some of them participated its sport (wrestling ) through communities from the Internet or colleges.
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Original:  In Taiwan, not only basic consumers watched TV shows and discussed via the Internet, but some of them participated its sport (wrestling ) through communities from the Internet or colleges.
Revised:  In Taiwan, not only basic consumers watched TV shows and discuss them via the Internet, but some of them participated its sport (wrestling ) through communities from the Internet or colleges.
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Original:  In Taiwan, not only basic consumers watched TV shows and discussed via the Internet, but some of them participated its sport (wrestling ) through communities from the Internet or colleges.
Revised:  In Taiwan, not only basic consumers watched TV shows and discussed via the Internet, but some of them participate in the sport of wrestling through communities from the Internet or colleges.
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Original:  How did the communities drive basic consumers ( TV spectators and wrestling fans ) and (government ) officials pay more attentions in wrestling?
Revised:  How did the communities drive TV spectators and wrestling fans ) and (government ) officials pay more attentions in wrestling?
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Original:  How did the communities drive basic consumers ( TV spectators and wrestling fans ) and (government ) officials pay more attentions in wrestling?
Revised:  How did the communities drive basic consumers ( TV spectators and wrestling fans and government officials pay more attentions in wrestling?
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Original:  How did the communities drive basic consumers ( TV spectators and wrestling fans ) and (government ) officials pay more attentions in wrestling?
Revised:  How did the communities drive basic consumers ( TV spectators and wrestling fans ) and (government ) officials pay more attention in wrestling?
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Original:  Will "wrestling " become a future star in Taiwan?
Revised:  Is wrestling a future key sport in Taiwan?
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Original:  The tracks are said to have been built in 1897  
Revised:  The tracks are said to have been built in 1897. 
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Original: The prefecture-level city of Zibo is highlighted .
Revised: Location of Shandong within China .
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Original:  Two trains have collided in Shandong, China 4:41am local time on Monday killing at least 70 people and injuring over 400, including four French citizens.
Revised:  Two trains collided in Shandong, China 4:41am local time on Monday killing at least 70 people and injuring over 400, including four French citizens.
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Original:  Two trains collided in Shandong, China 4:41am local time on Monday killing at least 70 people and injuring over 400, including four French citizens.
Revised:  Two trains collided in Shandong, China 4:41am local time on Monday killing at least 71 people and injuring over 400, including four French citizens.
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Original: Journalists banned from Mount Everest Journalists are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest, when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the worlds highest.
Revised: Journalists Journalists are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest, when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the worlds highest.
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Original: Journalists banned from Mount Everest Journalists are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest, when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the worlds highest.
Revised: Journalists banned from Mount Everest are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest, when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the worlds highest.
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Original:  A Nepali official aimed to  the new restriction.
Revised:  A Nepali official aimed to justify the new restriction.
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Original:  "We are doing this for our friend China," he said  
Revised:  "We are doing this for our friend China," he said . 
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Original: Journalists are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest, when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the worlds highest.
Revised: Mount EverestJournalists are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest, when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the worlds highest.
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Original: Mount EverestJournalists are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest , when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the worlds highest.
Revised: Mount EverestJournalists are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the worlds highest.
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Original: Mount EverestJournalists are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest , when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the worlds highest.
Revised: Mount EverestJournalists are no longer allowed to go any higher than base camp on Mount Everest , when visiting the Nepalese side of the mountain, which is the world's highest.
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Original: "We knew there were restrictions on video cameras and satellite phones but were now told even pre-recorded radio material on non-political subjects would not be allowed," said BBC reporter Charles Haviland on the incident.
Revised: "We knew there were restrictions on video cameras and satellite phones but we're now told even pre-recorded radio material on non-political subjects would not be allowed," said BBC reporter Charles Haviland on the incident.
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Original:  In goal, Michael Rensing replaced Oliver Kahn, Willy Sagnol replaced Philipp Lahm, Daniel van Buyten replaced Lucio, Andreas Ottl and Jose Ernesto Sosa replaced Zé Roberto and Franck Ribery and Lukas Podolski replaced Miroslav Klose . Category:Football Match Reports Category:Sports Category:Bayern Munich Category:Munich Category:Germa
Revised:  In goal, Michael Rensing replaced Oliver Kahn, Willy Sagnol replaced Philipp Lahm, Daniel van Buyten replaced Lucio, Andreas Ottl and Jose Ernesto Sosa replaced Zé Roberto and Franck Ribery and Lukas Podolski replaced Miroslav Klose Category:Football Match Reports Category:Sports Category:Bayern Munich Category:Munich Category:Germa
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Original:  In goal, Michael Rensing replaced Oliver Kahn, Willy Sagnol replaced Philipp Lahm, Daniel van Buyten replaced Lucio, Andreas Ottl and Jose Ernesto Sosa replaced Zé Roberto and Franck Ribery and Lukas Podolski replaced Miroslav Klose . Category:Football Match Reports Category:Sports Category:Bayern Munich Category:Munich Category:Germa
Revised:  In goal, Michael Rensing replaced Oliver Kahn, Willy Sagnol replaced Philipp Lahm, Daniel van Buyten replaced Lucio, Andreas Ottl and Jose Ernesto Sosa replaced Zé Roberto and Franck Ribery and Lukas Podolski replaced Miroslav Klose . 
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Original:  New features include an uprated guidance and control system, first flown on the Zenit-2M in June 2007.
Revised:  New features include an upgraded guidance and control system, first flown on the Zenit-2M in June 2007.
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Original:  Last year the sudden collpase of MAXjet Airways left passengers stranded on Christmas Eve.
Revised:  Last year the sudden collapse of MAXjet Airways left passengers stranded on Christmas Eve.
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Original: Manchester United  are heading to Moscow, Russia to play in the UEFA Champions League Final on May 21 after beating  Barcelona 1-0  on Tuesday evening.
Revised: Manchester United FC are heading to Moscow, Russia to play in the UEFA Champions League Final on May 21 after beating Barcelona 1-0 on Tuesday evening.
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