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Original:  Teenagers ' desire to win recognition for their exploits makes them post revealing videos in sites such as YouTube.
Revised:  Teenagers ' desire to win recognition for their exploits make them post revealing videos in sites such as YouTube.
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Original:  King was the Nephew of singer and Academy Award winning actress, Jennifer Hudson.
Revised:  King was the nephew of American singer and Academy Award winning actress, Jennifer Hudson.
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Original:  It is unlikely that Stevens will win reelection given the convictions.
Revised:  It is unlikely that Stevens will retain his seat in the Senat given the convictions.
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Original:  While a long-time Senator with many accomplishments, Stevens is known to many young people for a rambling speech against net neutrality in which he referred to the internet as a series of tubes.
Revised:  While a long-time Senator with many accomplishments, Stevens is known to many for a rambling speech against net neutrality in which he referred to the internet as a series of tubes.
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Original:  Allen The jury in the District of Columbia found Stevens guilty on all seven counts.
Revised:  The jury in the District of Columbia found Stevens guilty on all seven counts.
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Original: Ma'ariv , an daily newspaper, reported that according to a leak of an source, the American secretary of state will describe Israel as a Jewish state in the outline document of the peace agreement between Israel and the (PA), despite the widespread objection.
Revised:  , an daily newspaper, reported that according to a leak of an source, the American secretary of state will describe Israel as a Jewish state in the outline document of the peace agreement between Israel and the (PA), despite the widespread objection.
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Original: Ma'ariv , an daily newspaper, reported that according to a leak of an source, the American secretary of state will describe Israel as a Jewish state in the outline document of the peace agreement between Israel and the (PA), despite the widespread objection.
Revised: Ma'ariv , an daily newspaper, reports that according to a leak of an source, the American secretary of state will describe Israel as a Jewish state in the outline document of the peace agreement between Israel and the (PA), despite the widespread objection.
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Original: Ma'ariv , an daily newspaper, reported that according to a leak of an source, the American secretary of state will describe Israel as a Jewish state in the outline document of the peace agreement between Israel and the (PA), despite the widespread objection.
Revised: Ma'ariv , an daily newspaper, reported that according to a leak of an source, the American secretary of state will describe Israel as a state in the outline document of the peace agreement between Israel and the (PA), despite the widespread objection.
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Original: Ma'ariv , an daily newspaper, reported that according to a leak of an source, the American secretary of state will describe Israel as a Jewish state in the outline document of the peace agreement between Israel and the (PA), despite the widespread objection.
Revised: Ma'ariv , an daily newspaper, reported that according to a leak of an source, the American secretary of state will describe Israel as a Jewish state in the outline document of the peace agreement between Israel and the (PA), despite widespread objection.
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Original:  Moreover, it is noted that the document recognizes Palestine as the state of the Palestinian nation .
Revised:  Moreover, it is noted that the document recognizes Palestine as the state of the Palestinian people .
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Original:  According to the Telegraph , diplomats fear that the document will be perceived as biased in favor of the Israeli side over the Palestinian side and that therefore they won't accept it.
Revised:  According to , diplomats fear that the document will be perceived as biased in favor of the Israeli side over the Palestinian side and that therefore they won't accept it.
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Original:  According to the Telegraph , diplomats fear that the document will be perceived as biased in favor of the Israeli side over the Palestinian side and that therefore they won't accept it.
Revised:  According to the Telegraph , diplomats fear that the document will be perceived as biased in favor of the Israeli side and therefore the Palestinians will not accept it.
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Original: Israel requested that the peace agreement will include recognition of Israel as a Jewish state.
Revised: Israel requested the peace agreement will include recognition of Israel as a Jewish state.
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Original: Israel requested that the peace agreement will include recognition of Israel as a Jewish state.
Revised: Israel requested that the peace agreement include recognition of Israel as a Jewish state.
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Original:  However, Palestinian sources say that such recognition will dispose 5.5 million Palestinians from the right to return to their homes which they were driven out from with the establishment of Israel starting from 1948.
Revised:  However, Palestinian authorities say that such recognition will dispose 5.5 million Palestinians from the right to return to their homes which they were driven out from with the establishment of Israel starting from 1948.
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Original:  However, Palestinian sources say that such recognition will dispose 5.5 million Palestinians from the right to return to their homes which they were driven out from with the establishment of Israel starting from 1948.
Revised:  However, Palestinian sources say that such recognition will dispose 5.5 million Palestinians from the right to return to their homes which they were driven out from with the establishment of Israel .
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Original:  In addition,  expressed his worries that such recognition will hurt the Palestinian citizens of Israel who are numbered at 1.5 million people and are a fifth of Israel's citizens .
Revised:  In addition, Palestinian leader expressed his worries that such recognition will hurt the Palestinian citizens of Israel who are numbered at 1.5 million people and are a fifth of Israel's citizens .
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Original:  In addition,  expressed his worries that such recognition will hurt the Palestinian citizens of Israel who are numbered at 1.5 million people and are a fifth of Israel's citizens .
Revised:  In addition, expressed his worries such recognition will hurt the Palestinian citizens of Israel who are numbered at 1.5 million people and are a fifth of Israel's citizens .
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Original:  In addition,  expressed his worries that such recognition will hurt the Palestinian citizens of Israel who are numbered at 1.5 million people and are a fifth of Israel's citizens .
Revised:  In addition, expressed his worries that such recognition will hurt the 1.5 million people and are a fifth of Israel's citizens .
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Original: Nabil Shaath ' , the former Palestinian Foreign Minister, was quoted by the Telegraph regarding the leak telling reporters that "When you talk about a Jewish state, you are talking about the end of the end of any solution for Palestinian refugees - do you think any Palestinian can accept this  " . Additionally, Nabil Shaath ' said that "If Mr Kerry thinks this is the sum of his brilliant intelligence, the document will go nowhere.
Revised: Nabil Shaath , the former Palestinian Foreign Minister, was quoted by the Telegraph regarding the leak telling reporters that "When you talk about a Jewish state, you are talking about the end of the end of any solution for Palestinian refugees - do you think any Palestinian can accept this " . Additionally, Nabil Shaath ' said that "If Mr Kerry thinks this is the sum of his brilliant intelligence, the document will go nowhere.
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Original: Nabil Shaath ' , the former Palestinian Foreign Minister, was quoted by the Telegraph regarding the leak telling reporters that "When you talk about a Jewish state, you are talking about the end of the end of any solution for Palestinian refugees - do you think any Palestinian can accept this  " . Additionally, Nabil Shaath ' said that "If Mr Kerry thinks this is the sum of his brilliant intelligence, the document will go nowhere.
Revised: Nabil Shaath ' , the former Palestinian Foreign Minister, was quoted by The Telegraph telling reporters after the leak "When you talk about a Jewish state, you are talking about the end of the end of any solution for Palestinian refugees - do you think any Palestinian can accept this " . Additionally, Nabil Shaath ' said that "If Mr Kerry thinks this is the sum of his brilliant intelligence, the document will go nowhere.
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Original: Nabil Shaath ' , the former Palestinian Foreign Minister, was quoted by the Telegraph regarding the leak telling reporters that "When you talk about a Jewish state, you are talking about the end of the end of any solution for Palestinian refugees - do you think any Palestinian can accept this  " . Additionally, Nabil Shaath ' said that "If Mr Kerry thinks this is the sum of his brilliant intelligence, the document will go nowhere.
Revised: Nabil Shaath ' , the former Palestinian Foreign Minister, was quoted by the Telegraph regarding the leak telling reporters that "When you talk about a Jewish state, you are talking about the end of the end of any solution for Palestinian refugees - do you think any Palestinian can accept this ? " . Additionally, Nabil Shaath ' said that "If Mr Kerry thinks this is the sum of his brilliant intelligence, the document will go nowhere.
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Original: Nabil Shaath ' , the former Palestinian Foreign Minister, was quoted by the Telegraph regarding the leak telling reporters that "When you talk about a Jewish state, you are talking about the end of the end of any solution for Palestinian refugees - do you think any Palestinian can accept this  " . Additionally, Nabil Shaath ' said that "If Mr Kerry thinks this is the sum of his brilliant intelligence, the document will go nowhere.
Revised: Nabil Shaath ' , the former Palestinian Foreign Minister, was quoted by the Telegraph regarding the leak telling reporters that "When you talk about a Jewish state, you are talking about the end of the end of any solution for Palestinian refugees - do you think any Palestinian can accept this " Shaath also said "If Mr Kerry thinks this is the sum of his brilliant intelligence, the document will go nowhere.
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Original:  Moreover, it will refer to the future state of which is sacred to both sides.
Revised:  Other topics covered reportedly include the future state of which is sacred to both sides.
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Original:  Finally, it will address the Jordan Valley issuein which Israel demands to leave military presence for 10 years once an agreement is signed while the PA agrees to leave such presence only for 5 years
Revised:  Finally, it will address the Jordan Valley issuein which Israel demands to leave military presence for 10 years once an agreement is signed while the PA agrees to leave such presence only for five years
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Original:  The document will be presented to  , the Israeli Prime Minister, during his upcoming visit to the USA next month and is meant to serve as an outline for a future peace agreement between the two sides.
Revised:  The document will be presented to Benjamin Netanyahu , the Israeli Prime Minister, during his upcoming visit to the USA next month and is meant to serve as an outline for a future peace agreement between the two sides.
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Original:  He began the Beverly Hills Playhouse in 1978 and taught acting classes there to noted actors including George Clooney and Gene Hackman. 
Revised:  He began the Beverly Hills Playhouse in 1978 and taught acting classes there to noted actors including George Clooney and Gene Hackman. Katselas is survived by a sister and two brothers.
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Original: Two white supremists were charged Monday for planning to assassinate US Senator and Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and  black schoolchildren.
Revised: Two white supremacists were charged Monday for planning to assassinate US Senator and Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and black schoolchildren.
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Original:  They are set to appear in court Thursday.
Revised:  The supremacists are set to appear in court Thursday.
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Original:  Coward and Schlesselman, he said, referred to it as their "their last, final act" and that they did not believe they would be able to do it.
Revised:  Cowart and Schlesselman, he said, referred to it as their "their last, final act" and that they did not believe they would be able to do it.
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Original:    ]     Two white supremacists were charged Monday for planning to assassinate US Senator and Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and as well as to kill a group of black schoolchildren.
Revised:  ] to live forever begging on your knees." Two white supremacists were charged Monday for planning to assassinate US Senator and Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and as well as to kill a group of black schoolchildren.
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Original:  They also planned "killing 88%DIFDELCMD < [%%% black people and beheading 14 African-Americans" at an African-American school.
Revised:  They also planned "killing 88%DIFDELCMD < [%%% people and beheading 14 African-Americans" at an African-American school.
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Original:  No others have been found in the plot
Revised:  No co-conspirators have been found in the plot
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Original:  No others have been found in the plot
Revised:  No others have been found or alleged
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Original:  Schlesselman listed on his MySpace-page "being racist" as his occupation.
Revised:  Schlesselman listed on his MySpace page "being racist" as his occupation.
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Original:  Cowart also had a MySpace-page on which photos of weapons were presented under a heading of "My Guns".
Revised:  Cowart also had a MySpace page on which photos of weapons were presented under a heading of "My Guns".
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Original:  Some have questioned the pairs ability to carry out the alleged schemes, but authorities have been very concerned about Obama being the first black presidential nominee from a major party.
Revised:  Some have questioned the pairs ability to carry out the alleged schemes, but authorities have been very concerned about Obama as the first black presidential nominee from a major party.
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Original: Schlesselman listed on his MySpace page "being racist" as his occupation  .
Revised: Schlesselman listed "being racist" as his occupation .
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Original: Schlesselman listed on his MySpace page "being racist" as his occupation  .
Revised: Schlesselman listed on his MySpace page "being racist" as his occupation on his MySpace page .
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Original:  The International Monetary Fund  , the World Bank  , and the African Development Fund will write off all of the money owed to them by the selected countries.
Revised:  The International Monetary Fund (IMF) , the World Bank , and the African Development Fund will write off all of the money owed to them by the selected countries.
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Original:  The deal, devised by the United Kingdom, aims to free up government revenue for domestic spending on things such as education and health services.
Revised:  The deal, devised by the United Kingdom, could potentially free up government revenue for domestic spending on things such as education and health services.
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Original:  125px|Gordon Brown, the British Chancellor of the Exchequer (finance minister) The World Bank, the International Monetary Fund and the African Development Fund will write off all of the money owed to them by selected nations.
Revised:  125px|Gordon Brown, the British Chancellor of the Exchequer (finance minister) The World Bank, the International Monetary Fund and the African Development Fund will write off all of the money owed to them by the above listed nations.
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Original:  I hereby metaphorically splooge in the eye of WIKINEWS  
Revised:  I hereby metaphorically splooge in the eye of WIKINEWS . 
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Original: The probes have to shut down for two weeks each month to survive the "", during which surface temperature drops to -180 °C or less.
Revised: The probes have to shut down for two weeks each month to survive the "", during which surface temperature drops to -180 or less.
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Original:  Only the US and ex-USSR had previously landed rovers on the moon, with China and the States fueling renewed interest in Earth's natural satellite as a possible source of minerals
Revised:  Only the and ex- had previously landed rovers on the moon, with China and the States fueling renewed interest in Earth's natural satellite as a possible source of minerals
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Original:  , China's first moon rover, has  been declared irreparably damaged.
Revised:  , China's first moon rover, has today been declared irreparably damaged.
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Original:   , China's first moon rover, has today been declared irreparably damaged.
Revised:  , China's first moon rover, irreparably damaged.
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Original:  It was found that the ice thickness has been fairly constant for the five winters before this .
Revised:  It was found that the ice thickness had been fairly constant for the five winters before this .
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Original:  It was found that the ice thickness has been fairly constant for the five winters before this .
Revised:  It was found that the ice thickness has been fairly constant for the five previous winters .
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Original:  The researchers have been able to highlight widespread ice thinning in areas covered by both old and young ice , most severe since records began in the early 1990s.
Revised:  The researchers were able to highlight widespread ice thinning in areas covered by both old and young ice , most severe since records began in the early 1990s.
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Original:  The researchers have been able to highlight widespread ice thinning in areas covered by both old and young ice , most severe since records began in the early 1990s.
Revised:  The researchers have been able to highlight widespread ice thinning in areas covered by both old and young ice . This thinning constitutes the most severe since records began in the early 1990s.
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Original:  The researchers have been able to highlight widespread ice thinning in areas covered by both old and young ice , most severe since records began in the early 1990s.
Revised:  The researchers have been able to highlight widespread ice thinning in areas covered by both old and young ice , most severe since records started being taken in the early 1990s.
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Original:  The work provides the first definitive proof for overall decrease in Arctic ice volume, claim  authors.
Revised:  The work provides the first definitive proof for overall decrease in Arctic ice volume, claim the authors.
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Original:  The researchers have found that last winter the ice thickness had decreased by an average of 26 centimeters below the 2002-2008 winter average.
Revised:  The researchers have found that last winter 's ice thickness represented a decrease of an average of 26 centimeters below the 2002-2008 winter average.
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Original:  Extreme ice thinning in western Arctic during winter of 2008 could be the reason for the regionbecoming relatively ice free in the summerand open to shipping  the first time in 30 years.
Revised:  Extreme ice thinning in western Arctic during winter of 2008 could be the reason for the regionbecoming relatively ice free in the summerand open to shipping for the first time in 30 years.
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Original:  Measurements of the ice thickness, as in the present study, gives definite proof for ice melting.
Revised:  Measurements of the ice thickness, as in the present study, give definite proof for ice melting.
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Original: A recent study based on satellite radar altimetry indicates drastic thinning of Arctic ice during the winter of 2007.
Revised: A recent study based on satellite radar altimetry indicates thinning of Arctic ice during the winter of 2007.
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Original: 105px Missing American teen Natalee Holloway, who vanished on the Dutch island of Aruba two weeks ago  is feared to be dead today following a suspect's statement earlier this morning.
Revised: 105px Missing American teen Natalee Holloway, who vanished on the Dutch island of Aruba two weeks ago , is feared to be dead today following a suspect's statement earlier this morning.
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Original:  An additional three teenagers who were believed to be the last people who saw Halloway are now under custody.
Revised:  Additionally, three teenagers who were believed to be the last people who saw Halloway are now under custody.
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Original:  An additional three teenagers who were believed to be the last people who saw Halloway are now under custody.
Revised:  An additional three teenagers who were believed to be the last people to have seen Halloway are now under custody.
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Original:  Among the three teenagers is 18-year-old Satish Kalpoe, 21-year-old Depak Kalpoe, and 17-year-old Joran Van Der Sloot, a friend of the brothers and son to a judge.
Revised:  Among the three teenagers is 18-year-old Satish Kalpoe, 21-year-old Depak Kalpoe, and 17-year-old Joran van der Sloot, a friend of the brothers and son to a judge.
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Original:  Anita Van Der Sloot, mother of suspect Jordan Van Der Sloot, told American news network CNN that her son stated to her that he was "innocent", and even offered to speak to Holloway's family.
Revised:  Anita van der Sloot, mother of suspect Jordan Van Der Sloot, told American news network CNN that her son stated to her that he was "innocent", and even offered to speak to Holloway's family.
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Original:  Among the three teenagers is 18-year-old Satish Kalpoe, 21-year-old Depak Kalpoe, and 17-year-old Joran van der Sloot, a friend of the brothers and son to a judge .
Revised:  Among the three teenagers is 18-year-old Satish Kalpoe, 21-year-old Depak Kalpoe, and 17-year-old Joran van der Sloot, a friend of the brothers and son to a Judicial Servant .
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Original:  Deputy Police Commissioner District 1 Gerold Dompig said that the suspect was leading police to a scene, where it is believed a major update to the case is to be found.
Revised:  Police Commissioner District 1 Gerold Dompig said that the suspect was leading police to a scene, where it is believed a major update to the case is to be found.
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Original: 105px Missing American teen Natalee Holloway, who vanished on the Dutch island of Aruba two weeks ago, is feared to be dead today following a suspect's statement earlier this morning.
Revised:  Missing American teen Natalee Holloway, who vanished on the Dutch island of Aruba two weeks ago, is feared to be dead today following a suspect's statement earlier this morning.
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Original: Until now, politics , even those from opposition to the government , are trying to preserve the personal image of the President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva.
Revised: Until now, politicians , even those from opposition to the government , are trying to preserve the personal image of the President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva.
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Original: Until now, politics , even those from opposition to the government , are trying to preserve the personal image of the President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva.
Revised: Until now, politics , even those from opposition to the government , were trying to preserve the personal image of the President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva.
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