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Original:  Once the application is launched on an Android device, it acquires root privilege of the device through which sensitive dataare stolen . SIM card number Phone number IMEI number IMSI number Screen resolution and Native time
Revised:  Once the application is launched on an Android device, it acquires root privileges on the device and then accesses sensitive data . SIM card number Phone number IMEI number IMSI number Screen resolution and Native time
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Original:  Once the application is launched on an Android device, it acquires root privilege of the device through which sensitive dataare stolen . SIM card number Phone number IMEI number IMSI number Screen resolution and Native time
Revised:  Once the application is launched on an Android device, it acquires root privilege of the device through which sensitive dataare stolen . SIM card number Phone number IMEI number IMSI number Screen resolution Native time
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Original: Kathleen Baker (born February 28, 1997) is an American competition swimmer for the LA Current of the International Swimming League, who specializes in freestyle and backstroke events.
Revised: Kathleen Baker (born February 28, 1997) is an American competition swimmer who specializes in freestyle and backstroke events.
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Original: Human interactions with microbes include both practical and symbolic uses of microbes, and negative interactions in the form of human , domestic animal, and crop diseases . Practical use of microbes began in ancient times with fermentation in food processing;
Revised: Human interactions with microbes include both practical and symbolic uses of microbes, and negative interactions in the form of alien , domestic animal, and crop diseases . Practical use of microbes began in ancient times with fermentation in food processing;
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Original: Human interactions with microbes include both practical and symbolic uses of microbes, and negative interactions in the form of human , domestic animal, and crop diseases . Practical use of microbes began in ancient times with fermentation in food processing;
Revised: Human interactions with microbes include both practical and symbolic uses of microbes, and negative interactions in the form of human , domestic animal, and crop otherings . Practical use of microbes began in ancient times with fermentation in food processing;
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Original:  Microbes and Man is an admired "classic" book, first published in 1969, by the "father figure of British microbiology" Cole, Jeffrey, A., "Legless pathogens: how bacterial physiology provides the key to understanding pathogenicity", The Fred Griffith Prize Lecture 2011, reprinted in John Postgate on the whole subject of microorganisms and their relationships with humans.
Revised:  Microbes and Man is an admired "classic" book, first published in 1969, by the "father figure of British microbiology" John Postgate on the whole subject of microorganisms and their relationships with humans.
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Original: International business The communication gaps that exist in international business can lead to misunderstandings.
Revised: International communication The communication gaps that exist in international business can lead to misunderstandings.
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Original: Nutrition professionals Perception management is essentially a means for which an image or reputation can be created and maintained, whether it is true or not.
Revised:  Perception management is essentially a means for which an image or reputation can be created and maintained, whether it is true or not.
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Original: Food and nutrition industry Food and beverage manufacturers can manage the perceptions of consumers by controlling information on food labels.
Revised: Food and nutrition Food and beverage manufacturers can manage the perceptions of consumers by controlling information on food labels.
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Original: Authors John Grisham's book The Appeal is about a multimillion-dollar suit against a chemical company in Mississippi that dumped harmful chemicals in the water supply to save money.
Revised: Books John Grisham's book The Appeal is about a multimillion-dollar suit against a chemical company in Mississippi that dumped harmful chemicals in the water supply to save money.
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Original: Perception management is a term originated by the US military.
Revised: Perceptiom management is a term originated by the US military.
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Original: Perceptiom management is a term originated by the US military.
Revised: Perception management is a term originated by the US military.
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Original: The decision making process in relation to the future is an element of business that has a great effect on the company's future.
Revised: The decision-making process in relation to the future is an element of business that has a great effect on the company's future.
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Original:  If the company is too risk averse , this leads to underperformance , and a missed opportunity.
Revised:  If the company is too risk-averse , this leads to underperformance , and a missed opportunity.
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Original:  If the company is too risk averse , this leads to underperformance , and a missed opportunity.
Revised:  If the company is too risk averse , this leads to underperformance and a missed opportunity.
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Original:  Ultimately if this amount of risk taking leads the perception of the company to exceed the boundaries of logic and fact, the company will most likely fail based on their poor perception.
Revised:  Ultimately if this amount of risk-taking leads the perception of the company to exceed the boundaries of logic and fact, the company will most likely fail based on their poor perception.
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Original: Psychology A newly emerging section of psychology known as positive psychology has to do with controlling one's perception of the world.
Revised: Psychology A section of psychology known as positive psychology has to do with controlling one's perception of the world.
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Original: S. N. Haleʻole ( – October . 22, 1866) was a leading Native Hawaiian writer and historian of the Kingdom of Hawaii.
Revised: S. N. Haleʻole ( – October 22, 1866) was a leading Native Hawaiian writer and historian of the Kingdom of Hawaii.
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Original: Xudayar Yusifzad Akhmed Chatayev, Ahmad Shishani (, Ахмад Шишани;
Revised:  Akhmed Chatayev, Ahmad Shishani (, Ахмад Шишани;
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Original:  The security officials later confirmed that Chatayev was killed in the shootout when he blew himself up and the body was identified by DNA and fingerprint analysis.
Revised:  The security officials later confirmed that Chatayev was killed in the shootout when he blew himself up . His body was identified by DNA and fingerprint analysis.
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Original: From Chechnya to Syria Chatayev was born 14 July 1980 in Vedeno village, Vedensky District, Chechnya, in the then Checheno-Ingush ASSR, in Soviet URL He participated in the Second Chechen War and lost his arm in the battle.
Revised: From Chechnya to Syria Chatayev was born 14 July 1980 in Vedeno village, Vedensky District, Chechnya, in the then Checheno-Ingush ASSR, in Soviet Russia. He participated in the Second Chechen War and lost his arm in the battle.
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Original:  He is the organizer and mastermind of planned ISIL terrorist acts against Russian diplomatic missions URL
Revised:  He is the organizer and mastermind of planned ISIL terrorist acts against Russian diplomatic missions abroad."
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Original:  Soon he left Georgia with the declared intention to travel to Austria for rehabilitation, and was supported by Amnesty International and the NGO "Asyl in Not".
Revised:  Soon he left Georgia with the declared intention to travel to Austria for rehabilitation, where he also was supported by Amnesty International and the NGO "Asyl in Not".
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Original:  Soon he left Georgia with the declared intention to travel to Austria for rehabilitation, and was supported by Amnesty International and the NGO "Asyl in Not".
Revised:  Soon he left Georgia with the declared intention to travel to Austria for rehabilitation, and was supported by an NGO called "Asyl in Not".
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Original:  Widely regarded as one of the greatest actors in the history of Indian cinema, he has won several major awards including two National Film Awards for Best Actor for his performances in the movies Dastak (1970) and Koshish (1972).
Revised:  He won several major awards including two National Film Awards for Best Actor for his performances in the movies Dastak (1970) and Koshish (1972).
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Original:  Retrieved on 2018-11-08. 
Revised:  Retrieved on 2018-11-08. मुंगेर चेंबर ऑफ कॉमर्स शाखा हवेली खड़गपुर का 2021 से 2023 सत्र का अध्यक्ष एवं सचिव का चुनाव आपसी सहमति से संपन्न हुआ अध्यक्ष पद पर संजीव कुमार एवं सचिव पद पर सुरेश बाजोरिया का सदस्यों ने सर्वसम्मति से चुनाव किया आम सभा सह चुनाव की अध्यक्षता निवर्तमान अध्यक्ष अशोक साह ने किया पर्यवेक्षक के रुप में मुंगेर के अध्यक्ष कृष्ण कुमार अग्रवाल उपस्थित थे विशिष्ट अतिथि के रूप में मुंगेर शाखा के सह सचिव ऋषभ मिश्रा रविशंकर केसरी सेवा समिति के चेयरमैन संजय कुमार उर्फ बबलू उपस्थित थे मुंगेर से आए अतिथियों का स्वागत पगड़ी एवं माल्यार्पण करके किया गया मुंगेर के अध्यक्ष श्री कृष्ण कुमार अग्रवाल के निर्देशन में उपस्थित सदस्यों के बीच अध्यक्ष एवं सचिव पद का चुनाव के लिए नाम रखने का अनुरोध किया गया निवर्तमान अध्यक्ष अशोक साह ने अध्यक्ष पद के लिए संजीव कुमार एवं सचिव पद के लिए सुरेश बाजोरिया का नाम प्रस्तावित किया सर्वसम्मति से ध्वनि मत से सदस्यों ने सहर्ष स्वीकार किया अध्यक्ष कृष्ण कुमार अग्रवाल ने कहा कि संस्था सबसे बड़ा है संस्था हित सर्वोपरि है उन्होंने कहा कि सर्वसम्मति से निर्णय आपसी प्रेम बढ़ाता है अशोक सितारिया ने कहा कि सरकार के द्वारा व्यवसायियों के हित योजना की जानकारी हर व्यक्तियों को लेना चाहिए संजय कुमार बबलू ने कहा कि हर व्यवसायियों की समस्या चेंबर ऑफ कॉमर्स के परिवार के लोग को आगे बढ़ के समाधान करना है ऋषभ मिश्रा ने कहा कि मानव सेवा ही सर्वोपरि धर्म है नवनिर्वाचित अध्यक्ष संजीव कुमार ने कहा कि हर जाति वर्ग भेदभाव के बिना व्यवसाय हितों की रक्षा करना हमारा कर्तव्य है नवनिर्वाचित सचिव सुरेश बाजोरिया ने कहा कि चेंबर के हर सदस्यों का भेदभाव भुलाकर एक साथ कार्य करेंगे कोषाध्यक्ष संदीप कुमार टिबङे बाल आय व्यय पारित किया नए सदस्यों का माला पहनाकर प्रमाण पत्र दिया गया इस अवसर पर रेखा सिंह चौहान शंभू केसरी महेश साह अमित कुमार आदि ने अपना विचार रखा इस अवसर पर अंजनी ठाकुर राजेश केसरी पंकज चौरसिया राजीव चौरसिया विकास रंजन सोनू कुमार दीपक कुमार सिंह काशी केसरी संदीप टिंबरेवाल किशोर अग्रवाल विमल टिंबरेवाल पंकज कुमार सिन्हा प्रणव कुमार आदि दर्जनों सदस्य उपस्थित थे कार्यक्रम का संचालन कानूनी सलाहकार डॉ सुरेश कुमार कर रहे थे।
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Original:  9 July 1938 – 6 November 1985) was an Indian film actor.
Revised:  9 July 1938 – 6 November 1985) was an Indian actor.
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Original:  Gnana Oli was remade as Devata in 1976 with he reprising the role originally paid by Sivaji Ganesan.
Revised:  Gnana Oli was remade as Devata in 1976 with he reprising the role originally paid by Sivaji Ganesan.
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Original:  He is widely acclaimed by the critics and general public alike to be one of the all time greatest actors that Indian Cinema has ever produced.
Revised:  He is widely acclaimed by the critics and general public alike to be one of the all-time greatest actors that Indian Cinema has ever produced.
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Original:  ; ; Kepelino later claimed he had a role in quelling the unrest and attempted to have the queen to come down from Hānaiakamalama to quell the unrest . After the riot, Kepelino continued his political support for his employer and the Emmaites or the Queen Emma Party.
Revised:  ; ; Kepelino later claimed he had a role in quelling the unrest and attempted to have the queen come down from Hānaiakamalama to quell the unrest . After the riot, Kepelino continued his political support for his employer and the Emmaites or the Queen Emma Party.
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Original:  After Kalākaua's victory over Emma, her supporters instigated the Honolulu Courthouse riot which saw the destruction of government property and assault of multiple legislators who had voted against the queen.
Revised:  Upon the announcement of Kalākaua's victory over Emma, her supporters instigated the Honolulu Courthouse riot which saw the destruction of government property and assault of multiple legislators who had voted against the queen.
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Original:  During the  election, he wrote to the King of Italy and Queen Victoria asking for warships to support Queen Emma's claim.
Revised:  During the days leading up to the election, he wrote to the King of Italy and Queen Victoria asking for warships to support Queen Emma's claim.
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Original:  ; ; Kepelino later claimed he had a role in quelling the unrest and attempted to have the queen come down from Hānaiakamalama to stop her supporters.
Revised:  ; ; Kepelino later claimed he played a role in quelling the unrest and attempted to have the queen come down from Hānaiakamalama to stop her supporters.
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Original:  His writing combined both Hawaiian and Western Christian elements  and indicative of his missionary upbringing  portrayed the ancient Hawaiian political system as a form of despotism.
Revised:  His writing combined both Hawaiian and Western Christian elements , and indicative of his missionary upbringing portrayed the ancient Hawaiian political system as a form of despotism.
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Original:  His writing combined both Hawaiian and Western Christian elements  and indicative of his missionary upbringing  portrayed the ancient Hawaiian political system as a form of despotism.
Revised:  His writing combined both Hawaiian and Western Christian elements and indicative of his missionary upbringing , he portrayed the ancient Hawaiian political system as a form of despotism.
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Original:  Kepelino's works place him among the ranks of  early Hawaiian writers : David Malo, John Papa ʻĪʻī, Samuel Kamakau and S. N. Haleʻole.
Revised:  Kepelino's works place him among the ranks of other early Hawaiian writers : David Malo, John Papa ʻĪʻī, Samuel Kamakau and S. N. Haleʻole.
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Original:  Kepelino's works place him among the ranks of  early Hawaiian writers : David Malo, John Papa ʻĪʻī, Samuel Kamakau and S. N. Haleʻole.
Revised:  Kepelino's works place him among the ranks of early Hawaiian writers such as David Malo, John Papa ʻĪʻī, Samuel Kamakau and S. N. Haleʻole.
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Original:  After the queen's loss in the election and Kalākaua's accession to the throne, Kepelino became involved in an attempt to overthrow the new king in favor of Queen Emma, an action that led to his trial and imprisonment for treason.
Revised:  After the queen's loss in the election and Kalākaua's accession to the throne, Kepelino became involved in an attempt to overthrow the new king in favor of Queen Emma, which led to his trial and imprisonment for treason.
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Original:  It is a polymer mix paint that dries relatively URL Category: Fetish clothi
Revised:  It is a polymer mix that dries relatively URL Category: Fetish clothi
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Original: Spray-on clothing is a form of clothing  that is applied by spraying polymer over the body in such a manner that it appears as clothing.
Revised: Spray-on clothing is a form of clothing , that is applied by spraying polymer over the body in such a manner that it appears as clothing.
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Original:  It is a polymer mix that dries relatively URL
Revised:  It is a polymer mix that dries relatively quickly.
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Original: In a 2010 article published in the '' Daily Mail Laura Stott described being allowed to wear a prototype spray-on shirt, and being pleasantly surprised that it did not tear, or rip, when she hung her large handbag from her shoulder.
Revised: In a 2010 article published in the Daily Mail Laura Stott described being allowed to wear a prototype spray-on shirt, and being pleasantly surprised that it did not tear, or rip, when she hung her large handbag from her shoulder.
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Original:  The term was originally coined by German philosopher Jürgen Habermas who defined the public sphere as a " virtual or imaginary community which does not necessarily exist in any identifiable space ". Communication scholar Gerard A. Hauser defines it as "a discursive space in which individuals and groups associate to discuss matters of mutual interest and, where possible, to reach a common judgment about them".
Revised:  The term was originally coined by German philosopher Jürgen Habermas who defined the public sphere as " virtual or imaginary community which does not necessarily exist in any identifiable space ". Communication scholar Gerard A. Hauser defines it as "a discursive space in which individuals and groups associate to discuss matters of mutual interest and, where possible, to reach a common judgment about them".
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Original:  Jürgen Habermas says, "We call events and occasions 'public' when they are open to all, in contrast to closed or exclusive affairs"..
Revised:  Jürgen Habermas claims "We call events and occasions 'public' when they are open to all, in contrast to closed or exclusive affairs"..
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Original:  Jürgen Habermas defines the 'public sphere' as a "realm of our social life in which something approaching public opinion can be formed.
Revised:  This 'public sphere' as a "realm of our social life in which something approaching public opinion can be formed.
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Original:  Jürgen Habermas defines the 'public sphere' as a "realm of our social life in which something approaching public opinion can be formed.
Revised:  Jürgen Habermas defines the 'public sphere' is a "realm of our social life in which something approaching public opinion can be formed.
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Original:  According to Jürgen Habermas, there are two types of actors without whom no political public sphere could be put to work: professionals in the media system and politicians..
Revised:  According to Habermas, there are two types of actors without whom no political public sphere could be put to work: professionals in the media system and politicians..
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Original:  This world consists of common meanings and cultural norms from which interaction can take place.
Revised:  This world consistscommon meanings and cultural norms from which interaction can take place.
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Original: According to Habermas, there are two types of actors without whom no political public sphere could be put to work: professionals in the media system and politicians..
Revised: According to Habermas, there are two types actors without whom no political public sphere could be put to work: professionals in the media system and politicians..
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Original:   For Habermas, there are five types of actors who make their appearance on the virtual stage of an established public sphere:  (a) Lobbyists who represent special interest groups;
Revised:  For Habermas, there are five types actors who make their appearance on the virtual stage of an established public sphere: (a) Lobbyists who represent special interest groups;
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Original:   For Habermas, there are five types of actors who make their appearance on the virtual stage of an established public sphere:  (a) Lobbyists who represent special interest groups;
Revised:  For Habermas, there are five types of actors who make their appearance on the virtual stage an established public sphere: (a) Lobbyists who represent special interest groups;
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Original:  (b) Advocates who either represent general interest groups or substitute for a lack of representation of marginalized groups that are unable to voice their interests effectively ;
Revised:  (b) Advocates who either represent general interest groups or substitute for a lack representation marginalized groups that are unable to voice their interests effectively ;
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Original:  (b) Advocates who either represent general interest groups or substitute for a lack of representation of marginalized groups that are unable to voice their interests effectively ;
Revised:  (b) Advocates who either represent general interest groups or substitute for a lack of representation of marginalized groups that are unable to voice their interests effectively 
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Original:  The public sphere ( German ) is an area in social life where individuals can come together to freely discuss and identify societal problems, and through that discussion influence political action.
Revised:  The public sphere ( ) is an area in social life where individuals can come together to freely discuss and identify societal problems, and through that discussion influence political action.
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Original:  He has been a member of the Economic Advisory Council (EAC) of the Prime Minister of India, Atal Bihari Vajpayee, and had been a member of EAC of Prime Ministers Rajiv Gandhi, V.P.Singh, Chandra Shekhar and P.V. Narasimha Rao  .
Revised:  He has been a member of the Economic Advisory Council (EAC) for multiple Prime Ministers of India: Rajiv Gandhi, V.P.Singh, Chandra Shekhar and P.V. Narasimha Rao .
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Original:  He has been a member of the Economic Advisory Council (EAC) of the Prime Minister of India, Atal Bihari Vajpayee, and had been a member of EAC of Prime Ministers Rajiv Gandhi, V.P.Singh, Chandra Shekhar and P.V. Narasimha Rao  .
Revised:  He has been a member of the Economic Advisory Council (EAC) of the Prime Minister of India, Atal Bihari Vajpayee, and had been a member of EAC of Prime Ministers Rajiv Gandhi, V.P.Singh, Chandra Shekhar and P.V. Narasimha Rao and Atal Bihari Vajpayee .
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Original:  He has been a member of the Economic Advisory Council (EAC) for multiple Prime Ministers of India: Rajiv Gandhi, V.P.Singh, Chandra Shekhar and P.V. Narasimha Rao and Atal Bihari Vajpayee.
Revised:  He has been a member of the Economic Advisory Council (EAC) for multiple Prime Ministers of India: Rajiv Gandhi, V.P.Singh, Chandra Shekhar , P.V. Narasimha Rao and Atal Bihari Vajpayee.
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Original:  Ocean  acidification results from a rise in atmospheric carbon dioxide, which is taken up by the ocean.
Revised:  Ocean young acidification results from a rise in atmospheric carbon dioxide, which is taken up by the ocean.
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Original:  Ocean young acidification results from a rise in atmospheric carbon dioxide, which is taken up by the ocean.
Revised:  Ocean acidification results from a rise in atmospheric carbon dioxide, which is taken up by the ocean.
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Original:  The girl was the Aholo' s third children and there were many siblings from her father's previous marriage.
Revised:  The girl was the Aholos' third child, and there were many siblings from her father's previous marriage.
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Original:  She also attend Oberlin College, where she studied music.
Revised:  She also attended Oberlin College, where she studied music.
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Original:  In later life, she became a mother figure to her grandniece and grandnephews who called her as Aunty Tūtū.
Revised:  In later life, she became a mother figure to her grandniece and grandnephews who called her Aunty Tūtū.
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Original:  She help influenced her grandnephew Alfred Apaka, a baritone singer who popularized romantic Hawaiian ballads during the 1950s.
Revised:  She had a strong influence on her grandnephew Alfred Apaka, a baritone singer who popularized romantic Hawaiian ballads during the 1950s.
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