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Original:  According to Diamond 's view, andropause is a change of life in middle-aged men , which has hormonal, physical, psychological, interpersonal, social, sexual, and spiritual aspects.
Revised:  According to Diamond 's view, andropause is a change of life in middle-aged men which has hormonal, physical, psychological, interpersonal, social, sexual, and spiritual aspects.
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Original:  Diamond claims that this change occurs in all men,  may occur as early as age 45 to 50 and more dramatically after the age of 70 in some men, and that women's and men's experiences are somewhat similar phenomena.
Revised:  Diamond claims that this change occurs in all men, that it may occur as early as age 45 to 50 and more dramatically after the age of 70 in some men, and that women's and men's experiences are somewhat similar phenomena.
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Original:  The language of "andropause" and its supposed parallels with menopause have been rejected by the medical community.
Revised:  The medical community has rejected the term "andropause" and its supposed parallels with menopause have been rejected by the medical community.
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Original:  The language of "andropause" and its supposed parallels with menopause have been rejected by the medical community.
Revised:  The language of "andropause" and its supposed parallels with menopause .Compare:
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Original:  Thomas Perls and David J. Handelsman, in a 2015 editorial in the Journal of the American Geriatrics Society, say that between the ill-defined nature of the diagnosis and the pressure and advertising from drug companies selling testosterone and human growth hormone, as well as dietary supplement companies selling all kinds of "boosters" for aging men, the condition is overdiagnosed and overtreated.
Revised:  Thomas Perls and David J. Handelsman, in a 2015 editorial in the Journal of the American Geriatrics Society, say that between the ill-defined nature of the diagnosis and the pressure and advertising from drug companies selling testosterone and human-growth hormone, as well as dietary supplement companies selling all kinds of "boosters" for aging men, the condition is overdiagnosed and overtreated.
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Original:  The  National Health Service describes it as rare.
Revised:  The UK National Health Service describes it as rare.
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Original: Late-onset hypogonadism (LOH) or Testosterone Deficiency Syndrome URL is a condition in older men characterized by measurably low testosterone levels and clinical symptoms mostly of a sexual nature, including decreased desire for sex, fewer spontaneous erections, and erectile dysfunction.
Revised: Late-onset hypogonadism (LOH) or Testosterone Deficiency Syndrome (TDS) is a condition in older men characterized by measurably low testosterone levels and clinical symptoms mostly of a sexual nature, including decreased desire for sex, fewer spontaneous erections, and erectile dysfunction.
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Original: Late-onset hypogonadism (LOH) or Testosterone Deficiency Syndrome (TDS) is a condition in older men characterized by measurably low testosterone levels and clinical symptoms mostly of a sexual nature, including decreased desire for sex, fewer spontaneous erections, and erectile dysfunction.
Revised: Late-onset hypogonadism (LOH) or testosterone deficiency syndrome (TDS) is a condition in older men characterized by measurably low testosterone levels and clinical symptoms mostly of a sexual nature, including decreased desire for sex, fewer spontaneous erections, and erectile dysfunction.
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Original:  The terms "male menopause" and "andropause" are used in the popular media and are misleading, as they imply a sudden change in hormone levels similar to what women experience in menopause.
Revised:  The terms "male menopause" and "andropause" are used in the popular media but are misleading, as they imply a sudden change in hormone levels similar to what women experience in menopause.
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Original:  Society and culture The 1998 book Male Menopause by Jed Diamond, a licensed psychotherapist with a PhD in international health, fueled popular interest in the concept of "andropause".
Revised:  Society and culture The 1997 book Male Menopause by Jed Diamond, a licensed psychotherapist with a PhD in international health, fueled popular interest in the concept of "andropause".
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Original:  Society and culture The 1998 book Male Menopause by Jed Diamond, a licensed psychotherapist with a PhD in international health, fueled popular interest in the concept of "andropause".
Revised:  Society and culture The 1998 book Male Menopause by Jed Diamond, a psychologist with a PhD in international health, fueled popular interest in the concept of "andropause".
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Original: Algerian footballers Category:Algeria international footballers Category:1992 African Cup of Nations players Category:Paris Saint-Germain F.C. players Category:OGC Nice players Category:AS Saint-Étienne players Category:Neuchâtel Xamax players Category:Ligue 1 players Category:Ligue 2 players Category:Kabyle people Category:French people of Kabyle descent Category:Expatriate footballers in Switzerland Category:Olympique Noisy-le-Sec players Category:Algerian expatriates in Switzerla 
Revised: Algerian footballers Category:Algeria international footballers Category:1992 African Cup of Nations players Category:Paris Saint-Germain F.C. players Category:OGC Nice players Category:AS Saint-Étienne players Category:Neuchâtel Xamax players Category:Ligue 1 players Category:Ligue 2 players Category:Kabyle people Category:French people of Kabyle descent Category:Expatriate footballers in Switzerland Category:Olympique Noisy-le-Sec players Category:Algerian expatriates in Switzerland 
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Original: Algerian footballers Category:Algeria international footballers Category:1992 African Cup of Nations players Category:Paris Saint-Germain F.C. players Category:OGC Nice players Category:AS Saint-Étienne players Category:Neuchâtel Xamax players Category:Ligue 1 players Category:Ligue 2 players Category:Kabyle people Category:French people of Kabyle descent Category:  Expatriate footballers in Switzerland Category:Olympique Noisy-le-Sec players Category:Algerian expatriates in Switzerland
Revised: Algerian footballers Category:Algeria international footballers Category:1992 African Cup of Nations players Category:Paris Saint-Germain F.C. players Category:OGC Nice players Category:AS Saint-Étienne players Category:Neuchâtel Xamax players Category:Ligue 1 players Category:Ligue 2 players Category:Kabyle people Category:French people of Kabyle descent Category: French expatriates in Switzerland Category: Expatriate footballers in Switzerland Category:Olympique Noisy-le-Sec players Category:Algerian expatriates in Switzerland
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Original: 1992 African Cup of Nations players Category:Paris Saint-Germain F.C. players Category:OGC Nice players Category:AS Saint-Étienne players Category:Neuchâtel Xamax players Category:Ligue 1 players Category:Ligue 2 players Category:Kabyle people Category:French people of Kabyle descent Category: French expatriates in Switzerland Category: Expatriate footballers in Switzerland Category:Olympique Noisy-le-Sec players Category:Algerian expatriates in Switzerland
Revised: 1992 African Cup of Nations players Category:Paris Saint-Germain F.C. players Category:OGC Nice players Category:AS Saint-Étienne players Category:Neuchâtel Xamax players Category:Ligue 1 players Category:Ligue 2 players Category:Kabyle people Category:French people of Kabyle descent Category: Expatriate footballers in Switzerland Category:Olympique Noisy-le-Sec players Category:Algerian expatriates in Switzerland
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Original: Liazid Sandjak , (born September 11 , 1966) is a former Algerian international footballer.
Revised: Liazid Sandjak (born 11 , 1966) is a former Algerian international footballer.
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Original:  Late in his career, he played amateur football with Olympique Noisy-le-Sec, where he received a two-year ban after for shoving the referee after a match against Alès in October 2000. 
Revised:  Late in his career, he played amateur football with Olympique Noisy-le-Sec, where he received a two-year ban for shoving the referee after a match against Alès in October 2000. 
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Original:  Later the composition was performed in the popular 1972 film Deliverance, retitled "Dueling Banjos" and played by Eric Weissberg and Steve Mandel .
Revised:  Later the composition was performed in the popular 1972 film Deliverance, retitled "Dueling Banjos" and played by Eric Weissberg and Steve Mandell .
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Original:  In Person 1963 (Starday) Arthur Smith and the Crossroads Quartet 1962 (Starday) Mister Guitar 1962 (Starday) Fingers on Fire 1957 (MGM) Specials 1955 ( &  MGM) Arthur Smith, Vol. 1 (Polydor) The Original Dueling Banjos (CBS/Monument) Plays Bach, Bacharach, Bluegrass & Boogie (CBS/Monument ) The Road That Jesus Walked 1974 (Lamb Lion )
Revised:  In Person 1963 (Starday) Arthur Smith and the Crossroads Quartet 1962 (Starday) Mister Guitar 1962 (Starday) Fingers on Fire 1957 (MGM) Specials 1955 ( & MGM) Arthur Smith, Vol. 1 (Polydor) The Original Dueling Banjos (CBS/Monument) Plays Bach, Bacharach, Bluegrass & Boogie (CBS/Monument Lion )
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Original:  In Person 1963 (Starday) Arthur Smith and the Crossroads Quartet 1962 (Starday) Mister Guitar 1962 (Starday) Fingers on Fire 1957 (MGM) Specials 1955 ( &  MGM) Arthur Smith, Vol. 1 (Polydor) The Original Dueling Banjos (CBS/Monument) Plays Bach, Bacharach, Bluegrass & Boogie (CBS/Monument ) The Road That Jesus Walked 1974 (Lamb Lion )
Revised:  In Person 1963 (Starday) Arthur Smith and the Crossroads Quartet 1962 (Starday) Mister Guitar 1962 (Starday) Fingers on Fire 1957 (MGM) Specials 1955 ( & MGM) Arthur Smith, Vol. 1 (Polydor) The Original Dueling Banjos (CBS/Monument) Plays Bach, Bacharach, Bluegrass & Boogie (CBS/Monument ) The Road That Jesus Walked 1974 (Lamb )
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Original:  Smit was so horrified by the scene in which Ned Beatty as Bobby is violently, brutally and ferally sodomized by a mountain man, the overweight man being ordered to "squeal like a pig" in order for said mountain man to achieve sexual gratification.
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Original: Born in Clinton, South Carolina,  Arthur Smith was a textile mill worker who became a celebrated and respected country music instrumental composer, guitarist, fiddler, and banjo player.
Revised: Born in Clinton, South Carolina, United States, Arthur Smith was a textile mill worker who became a celebrated and respected country music instrumental composer, guitarist, fiddler, and banjo player.
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Original:  It reached the Top Ten in several categories and was hit #1  in the US and Canada.
Revised:  It reached the Top Ten in several categories and hit #1 in the US and Canada.
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Original: In 2015 , the ESC Congress will take place from the 29th of August to the 2nd of September in London, United Kingdom List of ESC Congresses The first ESC Congress was held in 1950 and from then on every 4 yearsEuropean Society of Cardiology until 1988, when it became an annual event.
Revised: In 2015 , the ESC Congress takes place from the 29th of August to the 2nd of September in London, United Kingdom List of ESC Congresses The first ESC Congress was held in 1950 and from then on every 4 yearsEuropean Society of Cardiology until 1988, when it became an annual event.
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Original: In 2015 , the ESC Congress will take place from the 29th of August to the 2nd of September in London, United Kingdom List of ESC Congresses The first ESC Congress was held in 1950 and from then on every 4 yearsEuropean Society of Cardiology until 1988, when it became an annual event.
Revised: In 2015 , the ESC Congress will take place from the 28th of August to the 2nd of September in London, United Kingdom List of ESC Congresses The first ESC Congress was held in 1950 and from then on every 4 yearsEuropean Society of Cardiology until 1988, when it became an annual event.
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Original:  Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London The cities to hold the ESC Congress the next two years are also known: 2016 - Rome 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna (4 times each) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
Revised:  Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome The citie to hold the ESC Congress the next two years are also known: 2016 - Rome 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna (4 times each) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
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Original:  Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London The cities to hold the ESC Congress the next two years are also known: 2016 - Rome 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna (4 times each) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
Revised:  Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London The cities to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna (4 times each) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
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Original:  Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome The citie to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna  (4 times each ) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
Revised:  Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome 2017 - Barcelona The city to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna (4 times each ) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
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Original:  Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome The citie to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna  (4 times each ) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
Revised:  Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome The citie to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2017 - Munich After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna (4 times each ) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
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Original:  Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome The citie to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna  (4 times each ) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
Revised:  Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome The citie to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona became the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna (4 times each ) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
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Original:  Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome The citie to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna  (4 times each ) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
Revised:  Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome The citie to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2017 - Barcelona After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona will become the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna and Munich (4 times each ) Some congresses (1994 and 2006) were organised jointly with the World Heart FederationWorld Heart Federation : Home under the name of "World Congress of Cardiology".
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Original: In 2017, the ESC Congress takes place from 26 to 30 August in Barcelona, Spain List of ESC Congresses The first ESC Congress was held in 1950 and from then on every 4 yearsEuropean Society of Cardiology until 1988, when it became an annual event.
Revised:  List of ESC Congresses The first ESC Congress was held in 1950 and from then on every 4 yearsEuropean Society of Cardiology until 1988, when it became an annual event.
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Original:  Berlin 2003 - Vienna 2004 - Munich 2005 - Stockholm 2006 - Barcelona 2007 - Vienna 2008 - Munich 2009 - Barcelona 2010 - Stockholm 2011 - Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome 2017 - Barcelona The city to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2018 - Munich  After the 2017 ESC Congress  Barcelona became the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna and Munich (4 times each as of 2018).
Revised:  Berlin 2003 - Vienna 2004 - Munich 2005 - Stockholm 2006 - Barcelona 2007 - Vienna 2008 - Munich 2009 - Barcelona 2010 - Stockholm 2011 - Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome 2017 - Barcelona 2018 - Munich After the 2017 ESC Congress Barcelona became the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna and Munich (4 times each as of 2018).
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Original:  Berlin 2003 - Vienna 2004 - Munich 2005 - Stockholm 2006 - Barcelona 2007 - Vienna 2008 - Munich 2009 - Barcelona 2010 - Stockholm 2011 - Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome 2017 - Barcelona The city to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2018 - Munich  After the 2017 ESC Congress  Barcelona became the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna and Munich (4 times each as of 2018).
Revised:  Berlin 2003 - Vienna 2004 - Munich 2005 - Stockholm 2006 - Barcelona 2007 - Vienna 2008 - Munich 2009 - Barcelona 2010 - Stockholm 2011 - Paris 2012 - Munich 2013 - Amsterdam 2014 - Barcelona 2015 - London 2016 - Rome 2017 - Barcelona The city to hold the ESC Congress the next year is known: 2018 - Munich After the 2017 ESC Congress , Barcelona became the city with most congresses since 1988(6), followed by Stockholm (5) and then by Amsterdam and Vienna and Munich (4 times each as of 2018).
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Original: Gilbert Anselme Girouard Source: Library and Archives Canada Gilbert Anselme Girouard (October 26, 1846 – January 13, 1885) was a general merchant and political figure in New Brunswick, Canada.
Revised: Gilbert Anselme Girouard Gilbert Anselme Girouard (October 26, 1846 – January 13, 1885) was a general merchant and political figure in New Brunswick, Canada.
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Original: Gilbert Anselme Girouard Source: Library and Archives Canada Gilbert Anselme Girouard (October 26, 1846 – January 13, 1885) was a general merchant and political figure in New Brunswick, Canada.
Revised: Gilbert Anselme Girouard Source: Library and Archives Canada (October 26, 1846 – January 13, 1885) was a general merchant and political figure in New Brunswick, Canada.
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Original:  South Africa Category:Years in South Afric 
Revised:  South Africa Category:Years in South Africa 
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Original:  References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Category:Years in South Africa South Afric
Revised:  References See Timeline of South African history for list of Category:Years in South Africa South Afric
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Original:  References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Category:Years in South Africa South Afric
Revised:  References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Referenc
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Original: __NOTOC__ Events  India officially stops sending Indian labourers to Natal  Erasmus Jacobs discovers a diamond  on the banks of the Orange River , near Hopetown 1 March - Stellenbosch Gymnasium is opened (later renamed Stellenbosch University) Births 3 April - James Barry Munnik Hertzog is born near Wellington, Cape Colony.
Revised:  Events India officially stops sending Indian labourers to Natal Erasmus Jacobs discovers a diamond on the banks of the Orange River , near Hopetown 1 March - Stellenbosch Gymnasium is opened (later renamed Stellenbosch University) Births 3 April - James Barry Munnik Hertzog is born near Wellington, Cape Colony.
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Original: __NOTOC__ Events  India officially stops sending Indian labourers to Natal  Erasmus Jacobs discovers a diamond  on the banks of the Orange River , near Hopetown 1 March - Stellenbosch Gymnasium is opened (later renamed Stellenbosch University) Births 3 April - James Barry Munnik Hertzog is born near Wellington, Cape Colony.
Revised: __NOTOC__ Events India officially stops sending Indian labourers to Natal . Erasmus Jacobs discovers a diamond on the banks of the Orange River , near Hopetown 1 March - Stellenbosch Gymnasium is opened (later renamed Stellenbosch University) Births 3 April - James Barry Munnik Hertzog is born near Wellington, Cape Colony.
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