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Original:  Furthermore,  Far EasTone Telecommunications and First International Telecom will do live demonstrations for enterprise solutions via WiMAX Experience Buses during the show hours.
Revised:  Furthermore, Far EasTone Telecommunications and First International Telecom doing live demonstrations of their enterprise offerings.
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Original:  Tim Whitford, who is overseeing the dig, said " if the blokes are recovered we'd like to see every effort made to see them identified and I would like to see them given a dignified military funeral.
Revised:  Tim Whitford, who is overseeing the dig, said " If the blokes are recovered we'd like to see every effort made to see them identified and I would like to see them given a dignified military funeral.
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Original:  Those are honours they have deserved for over 90 years.  
Revised:  Those are honours they have deserved for over 90 years. " 
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Original: Mount Diablo buckwheat Taxonomic name: Eriogonum truncatumMount Diablo buckwheat is a small pink flower that was only known to grow on Mount Diablo in  Contra Costa County, California.
Revised: Mount Diablo buckwheat Taxonomic name: Eriogonum truncatumMount Diablo buckwheat is a small pink flower that was only known to grow on Mount Diablo in remote Contra Costa County, California.
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Original:  Found nearly 30 miles east of San Francisco, Park found  the small pink flowering plant said to resemble baby's breath during a routine visit to the mountain.
Revised:  Found nearly 30 miles east of San Francisco, Park found identified the small pink flowering plant said to resemble baby's breath during a routine visit to the mountain.
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Original:  Mount Diablo buckwheat Taxonomic name: Eriogonum truncatumMount Diablo buckwheat is a small pink flower that was only known to grow on Mount Diablo in remote Contra Costa County, California.
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Original:  The property is being preserved by the Save Mount Diablo conservation group operating in the Mount Diablo State Park   .
Revised:  The property is being preserved by the Save Mount Diablo conservation group operating in the Mount Diablo State Park . .
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Original:  2005 Galápagos giant tortoise, Geochelone elephantopus, by Matthew Field During the last major eruption of Cerro Azul in 1998, some tortoises were airlifted away from the fire and lava, but others were burned in the natural disaster.
Revised:  During the last major eruption of Cerro Azul in 1998, some tortoises were airlifted away from the fire and lava, but others were burned in the natural disaster.
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Original:  Reuters reports the Galápagos Park , after flying rangers over the mountain, said in a statement that the lava is flowing away from both the Puerto Villamil settlement and the region where the tortoise's are ranging.
Revised:  Reuters reports that after Galápagos Park , after flying rangers over the mountain, said in a statement that the lava is flowing away from both the Puerto Villamil settlement and the region where the tortoise's are ranging.
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Original:  Reuters reports the Galápagos Park , after flying rangers over the mountain, said in a statement that the lava is flowing away from both the Puerto Villamil settlement and the region where the tortoise's are ranging.
Revised:  Reuters reports the Galápagos Park rangers flew over the mountain, said in a statement that the lava is flowing away from both the Puerto Villamil settlement and the region where the tortoise's are ranging.
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Original:  Reuters reports the Galápagos Park , after flying rangers over the mountain, said in a statement that the lava is flowing away from both the Puerto Villamil settlement and the region where the tortoise's are ranging.
Revised:  Reuters reports the Galápagos Park , after flying rangers over the mountain, they released a statement saying that the lava is flowing away from both the Puerto Villamil settlement and the region where the tortoise's are ranging.
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Original:  Reuters reports the Galápagos Park , after flying rangers over the mountain, said in a statement that the lava is flowing away from both the Puerto Villamil settlement and the region where the tortoise's are ranging.
Revised:  Reuters reports the Galápagos Park , after flying rangers over the mountain, said in a statement that the lava is flowing away from both the Puerto Villamil settlement and the region where the tortoises are ranging.
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Original:  The BBC has reported that some of the tube trains may have been damaged, although there was a heavy police presence at the event  
Revised:  The BBC has reported that some of the tube trains may have been damaged, although there was a heavy police presence at the event . 
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Original:  There was heavy police presence at the event Local police have said that the event, which was intended to just be an enjoyable evening, finished with an "unfortunate" ending.
Revised:  Local police have said that the event, which was intended to just be an enjoyable evening, finished with an "unfortunate" ending.
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Original: The underground was very crowded as a result of the event 17 people have been arrested after a party, attended by hundreds of people, took place on the London Underground to mark the last day that drinking alcohol was legal while traveling on the underground .
Revised: The underground was very crowded as a result of the event Seventeen people have been arrested after a party, attended by hundreds of people, took place on the London Underground to mark the last day that drinking alcohol was legal while traveling on the underground .
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Original: The underground was very crowded as a result of the event 17 people have been arrested after a party, attended by hundreds of people, took place on the London Underground to mark the last day that drinking alcohol was legal while traveling on the underground .
Revised: The underground was very crowded as a result of the event 17 people have been arrested after a party, attended by hundreds of people, took place on the London Underground to mark the last day that drinking alcohol was legal while travelling on the Underground .
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Original:  There was heavy police presence at the event The new ban prevent people from consuming, or carrying any alcoholic drinks while traveling on the London Underground.
Revised:  There was heavy police presence at the event The new ban prevent people from consuming, or carrying any alcoholic drinks while travelling on the London Underground.
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Original:  Several tube stations were shut due to the event . Liverpool Street, Euston, Euston Square, Aldgate, Gloucester Road and Baker Street were closed.
Revised:  Several tube stations were shut due to the event ; Liverpool Street, Euston, Euston Square, Aldgate, Gloucester Road and Baker Street were closed.
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Original:  The BBC has reported that some of the tube trains may have been damaged, although there was a heavy police presence at the event . Jeroen Weimar, from Transport for London commented on the incident.
Revised:  The BBC has reported that some of the tube trains may have been damaged, despite a heavy police presence at the event . Jeroen Weimar, from Transport for London commented on the incident.
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Original:  The BBC has reported that some of the tube trains may have been damaged, although there was a heavy police presence at the event . Jeroen Weimar, from Transport for London commented on the incident.
Revised:  The BBC has reported that some of the tube trains may have been damaged, although there was a heavy police presence . Jeroen Weimar, from Transport for London commented on the incident.
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Original: And clearly drinking alcohol can create a culture whereby people feel it's ok to do that sort of thing, it's ok to get more drunk when you're traveling .
Revised: And clearly drinking alcohol can create a culture whereby people feel it's okay to do that sort of thing, it's ok to get more drunk when you're traveling .
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Original: And clearly drinking alcohol can create a culture whereby people feel it's ok to do that sort of thing, it's ok to get more drunk when you're traveling .
Revised: And clearly drinking alcohol can create a culture whereby people feel it's ok to do that sort of thing, it's okay to get more drunk when you're traveling .
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Original: And clearly drinking alcohol can create a culture whereby people feel it's ok to do that sort of thing, it's ok to get more drunk when you're traveling .
Revised: And clearly drinking alcohol can create a culture whereby people feel it's ok to do that sort of thing, it's ok to get more drunk when you're travelling .
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Original: There was  heavy police presence at the event The new ban prevent people from consuming, or carrying any alcoholic drinks while travelling on the London Underground.
Revised: There was a heavy police presence at the event The new ban prevent people from consuming, or carrying any alcoholic drinks while travelling on the London Underground.
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Original: There was  heavy police presence at the event The new ban prevent people from consuming, or carrying any alcoholic drinks while travelling on the London Underground.
Revised: There was heavy police presence at the scene. The new ban prevent people from consuming, or carrying any alcoholic drinks while travelling on the London Underground.
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Original: There was  heavy police presence at the event The new ban prevent people from consuming, or carrying any alcoholic drinks while travelling on the London Underground.
Revised: There was heavy police presence at the event The new ban prevents people from consuming, or carrying any alcoholic drinks while travelling on the London Underground.
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Original:  Local police have said that the event , which was intended to just be an enjoyable evening, finished with an "unfortunate" ending.
Revised:  Local police have said that the party , which was intended to just be an enjoyable evening, finished with an "unfortunate" ending.
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Original:  Jeroen Weimar, from Transport for London commented on the incident ."We are encouraging our passengers to show a bit more respect and to be more considerate and involve other peoples' views and other passengers views as they make their journeys," he commented."
Revised:  Jeroen Weimar, from Transport for London commented on the incidents ."We are encouraging our passengers to show a bit more respect and to be more considerate and involve other peoples' views and other passengers views as they make their journeys," he commented."
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Original:  Several tube stations were shut due to the event ;
Revised:  Several tube stations were shut due to the disruption caused by the large number of people ;
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Original:  Law enforcement  say that another marriage took place on April 16, 2005 between Jeffs and a 12-year-old girl.
Revised:  Law enforcement officials say that another marriage took place on April 16, 2005 between Jeffs and a 12-year-old girl.
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Original:  According to the Las Vegas Review  the DNA samples were taken from Jeffs on Thursday afternoon via a cotton swab of the mouth.
Revised:  According to the Las Vegas Review , the DNA samples were taken from Jeffs on Thursday afternoon via a cotton swab of the mouth.
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Original: A report by the WHO on tobacco use stated that approximately two thirds of the planet's smokers reside in 10 countries: China, India, Indonesia, Russia, the United States, Japan, Bangladesh, Germany, and Turkey.
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Original: The Los Angeles County Fire Department has responded to a fully involved structure fire on the back lot of Universal City Studios in West Hollywood, California .
Revised: The Los Angeles County Fire Department responded to a fully involved structure fire on the back lot of Universal City Studios in West Hollywood, California .
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Original:  The "New York Street" sound stage was been completely destroyed , as well as damage to the Courthouse Square backlot, an exhibit on the movie King Kong, the video vault, and a ride known as the "Cyclone"  .
Revised:  The "New York Street" sound stage was been completely destroyed and the Courthouse Square backlot, an exhibit on the movie King Kong, the video vault, and a ride known as the "Cyclone" .
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Original:  The "New York Street" sound stage was been completely destroyed , as well as damage to the Courthouse Square backlot, an exhibit on the movie King Kong, the video vault, and a ride known as the "Cyclone"  .
Revised:  The "New York Street" sound stage was been completely destroyed , as well as damage to the Courthouse Square backlot, an exhibit on the movie King Kong, the video vault, and a ride known as the "Cyclone" were damaged .
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Original:  Three firefighters suffered minor burn
Revised:  Three firefighters suffered minor burns
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Original: The   Los Angeles County Fire Department responded to a fully involved structure fire on the back lot of Universal City Studios in West Hollywood, California which occurred shortly after dawn.
Revised: The The Los Angeles County Fire Department responded to a fully involved structure fire on the back lot of Universal City Studios in West Hollywood, California which occurred shortly after dawn.
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Original:   The "New York Street" sound stage was been completely destroyed and the Courthouse Square backlot, an exhibit on the movie King Kong, the video vault, and a ride known as the "Cyclone" were damaged.
Revised:  The "New York Street" sound stage was completely destroyed and the Courthouse Square backlot, an exhibit on the movie King Kong, the video vault, and a ride known as the "Cyclone" were damaged.
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Original:  County fire inspector Daryl Jacobs said at least three blocks of movie facades may have been destroyed.
Revised:  County fire inspector Daryl Jacobs said at least three blocks of movie façades may have been destroyed.
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Original:  "It will be awhile before we have it under control," Reynoso said.
Revised:  "It will be a while before we have it under control," Reynoso said.
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Original: The "New York Street" sound stage was completely destroyed and the Courthouse Square backlot from Wikipedia: Back to the Future, an exhibit on the movie King Kong, the video vault, and a ride known as the "Cyclone" were damaged.
Revised: The "New York Street" sound stage was completely destroyed and the Courthouse Square backlot from Back to the Future, an exhibit on the movie King Kong, the video vault, and a ride known as the "Cyclone" were damaged.
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Original:  The UK Civil Aviation Authority estimates the 7,000 UK travellers could be affected by the collapse   
Revised:  The UK Civil Aviation Authority estimates that 7,000 UK travellers could be affected by the collapse 
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Original:  The UK Civil Aviation Authority estimates the 7,000 UK travellers could be affected by the collapse   
Revised:  The UK Civil Aviation Authority estimates the 7,000 UK travellers could be affected by the collapse . 
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Original: Scientists say that as Phoenix landed, the energy from its thrusters cleared away a layer of soil which exposed a flat layer of a white substance, that NASA says could be ice.
Revised: Scientists say that as Phoenix landed, the exhaust from its thrusters cleared away a layer of soil which exposed a flat layer of a white substance, that NASA says could be ice.
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Original:  The image was taken on the fifth Martian day, or sol 5.
Revised:  The image was taken on the fifth Martian day, or Sol 5.
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Original: A view from under the lander , this image shows the layer of possible ice exposed by Phoenix's thrusters.
Revised: A view from under the lander showing the layer of possible ice exposed by Phoenix's thrusters.
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Original:  The Phoenix lander uses a robotic arm to dig through the protective top soil layer to the alleged water ice below and ultimately , to bring both soil and water ice to the lander platform for sophisticated scientific analysis
Revised:  The Phoenix lander uses a robotic arm to dig through the protective top soil layer to the alleged water ice below and ultimately bring both soil and water ice to the lander platform for sophisticated scientific analysis
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Original:  It's not impossible that it's something else, but our leading interpretation is ice," said top Phoenix investigator at the University of Arizona in Tuscon , Peter Smith.
Revised:  It's not impossible that it's something else, but our leading interpretation is ice," said top Phoenix investigator at the University of Arizona in Tucson , Peter Smith.
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Original:  His exit from the church's congregation came as media reports revealed that guest speaker of the church and Catholic priest Reverend Michael Pfleger went on a tirade on the pulpit declaring that Hillary Clinton believed she was entitled to the Democratic presidential nominaton because she is white.
Revised:  His exit from the church's congregation came as media reports revealed that guest speaker of the church and Catholic priest Reverend Michael Pfleger went on a tirade on the pulpit declaring that Hillary Clinton believed she was entitled to the Democratic presidential nomination because she is white.
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Original:  The pastor had an impact on Obama earlier in his life, and was once described as his spirtual guide.
Revised:  The pastor had an impact on Obama earlier in his life, and was once described as his spiritual guide.
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Original: I’m not denouncing the church, and I’m not interested in people who want me to denounce the church 
Revised: I’m not denouncing the church, and I’m not interested in people who want me to denounce the church .
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Original: Despite the speech, polls early in May revealed that Obama's favorablity fell from 50 to 45\% because of Wright's comments.
Revised: Despite the speech, polls early in May revealed that Obama's favorability fell from 50 to 45\% because of Wright's comments.
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Original: It was carrying the injured out of Li county,  having brought in disease control experts.
Revised: It was carrying the injured out of Li county, after having brought in disease control experts.
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Original:  The day before  the death toll from the disaster was confirmed to have reached 68,977 with another 17,974 missing.
Revised:  The day before , the death toll from the disaster was confirmed to have reached 68,977 with another 17,974 missing.
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Original:  The crash is reported to highlight ongoing difficulties responding to the quake
Revised:  The crash was reported to highlight ongoing difficulties responding to the quake
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Original: A military transport helicopter carrying a crew of four and ten injured earthquake survivors has crashed in China, it was reported by state news agency Xinhua.
Revised: A military transport helicopter carrying a crew of four and ten fruits earthquake survivors has crashed in China, it was reported by state news agency Xinhua.
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Original: A military transport helicopter carrying a crew of four and ten injured earthquake survivors has crashed in China, it was reported by state news agency Xinhua.
Revised: A military transport helicopter carrying a crew of four and ten injured earthquake survivors has spilled in China, it was reported by state news agency Xinhua.
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Original: Gianluca Zambrotta  returns to Serie A after agreeing to a contract with AC Milan.
Revised: Gianluca Zambrotta Gianluca Zambrotta returns to Serie A after agreeing to a contract with AC Milan.
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Original:  He played for  Barcelona for the past 2 seasons after Juventus FC were demoted after their part of the 2006 Serie A scandal.
Revised:  He played for FC Barcelona for the past 2 seasons after Juventus FC were demoted after their part of the 2006 Serie A scandal.
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Original:  The Democrats will seat all of the pledged delegates from both of the states, but will give each delegate only a half of a vote.
Revised:  The Democrats will seat all of the pledged delegates from both of the states, but will give each delegate only a half a vote.
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Original:  Party Chairman Howard Dean opened the meeting of the Rules Committee that determined the delegate allotment by asking democrats to look beyond the primary and towards the November general election.
Revised:  Party Chairman Howard Dean opened the meeting of the Rules Committee that determined the delegate allotment by asking Democrats to look beyond the primary and towards the November general election.
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Original:  " " This is about restoring America to its greatness, to restoring our moral authority and to healing America at home.
Revised:  This is about restoring America to its greatness, to restoring our moral authority and to healing America at home.
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Original: The Democratic Party  has reached a deal to seat primary delegates from Florida and Michigan at the Democratic National Convention in Denver  this August.
Revised: The Democratic Party of the United States has reached a deal to seat primary delegates from Florida and Michigan at the Democratic National Convention in Denver this August.
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Original: The Democratic Party  has reached a deal to seat primary delegates from Florida and Michigan at the Democratic National Convention in Denver  this August.
Revised: The Democratic Party has reached a deal to seat primary delegates from Florida and Michigan at the Democratic National Convention in Denver , Colorado this August.
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Original:  Scientists, who named the exposed area Snow Queen, say that as Phoenix landed the exhaust from its thrusters cleared away a three to four inch layer of Martian soil which exposed a flat layer of a white substance , that NASA says could be ice.
Revised:  Scientists, who named the exposed area Snow Queen, say that as Phoenix landed the exhaust from its thrusters cleared away a three to four inch layer of Martian soil which exposed a flat layer of a white substance that NASA says could be ice.
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Original:  Its mission is to determine Mars' s ability or inability to host life and hold water.
Revised:  Its mission is to determine Mars' ability or inability to host life and hold water.
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Original:  It began its first dig on the Martian surface on Saturday May 31  and the camera on board the arm caught an image of the first dig . "This first touch allows us to utilize the Robotic Arm accurately.
Revised:  It began its first dig on Saturday, May 31 and the camera on board the arm caught an image of the first dig . "This first touch allows us to utilize the Robotic Arm accurately.
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Original:  It began its first dig on the Martian surface on Saturday May 31  and the camera on board the arm caught an image of the first dig . "This first touch allows us to utilize the Robotic Arm accurately.
Revised:  It began its first dig on the Martian surface on Saturday May 31 , and the camera on board the arm caught an image of the first dig . "This first touch allows us to utilize the Robotic Arm accurately.
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Original:  It began its first dig on the Martian surface on Saturday May 31  and the camera on board the arm caught an image of the first dig . "This first touch allows us to utilize the Robotic Arm accurately.
Revised:  It began its first dig on the Martian surface on Saturday May 31 and the camera on board the arm caught an image . "This first touch allows us to utilize the Robotic Arm accurately.
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