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Original:  On the July, 2004 it was reported that Hashimoto hadn't stated the donation of 1 hundred million yen from a lobbist organisation, in the annual political financial income  outgo report which is legally mundatory to all minister and parliament speakers.
Revised:  On the July, 2004 it was reported that Hashimoto hadn't stated the donation of 1 hundred million yen from a lobbist organisation, in the annual political financial income and outgo report which is legally mundatory to all minister and parliament speakers.
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Original:  Hashimoto had received that donation from Japan Dental Political Federation, which has been one of his main supportive organisations.
Revised:  Hashimoto had received that donation from Japan Dental Political Federation, which has been one of his main supporting organisations.
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Original:  His relation between medical and pharmacy lobbiests has began at least  1963 when he was appointed as a secretary of Minister of Health and Welfare.
Revised:  His relation between medical and pharmacy lobbyists began at least 1963 when he was appointed as a secretary of Minister of Health and Welfare.
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Original:  His relation between medical and pharmacy lobbiests has began at least  1963 when he was appointed as a secretary of Minister of Health and Welfare.
Revised:  His relation between medical and pharmacy lobbiests has began at least in 1963 when he was appointed as a secretary of Minister of Health and Welfare.
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Original:  In the same year  he ran for a constituency for which his father had run since the death in that year.
Revised:  In the same year , he ran for a constituency for which his father had run since the death in that year.
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Original:  Later he was appointed to the Minister of Health and Welfare and played a roll of representative of this ministry during his career.
Revised:  Later he was appointed to the Minister of Health and Welfare and played a roll as the representative of this ministry during his career.
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Original:  He hadn't lost his seat until now since then .
Revised:  He had not lost his seat until now since then .
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Original:  He hadn't lost his seat until now since then .
Revised:  He hadn't lost his seat until now .
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Original:  He was appointed to the Minister of Health and Welfare,  the Minister of Industrial Minister successively.
Revised:  He was appointed to the Minister of Health and Welfare, and the Minister of Industrial Minister successively.
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Original:  He was the president of Liberal Democratic Party from 1995 till the lost of LDP at the election of the House of Councillors in 1998, and the Prime Minister of Japan from 1996 till his resignment from LDP presidency.
Revised:  He was the president of the LDP from 1995 till the lost of LDP at the election of the House of Councillors in 1998, and the Prime Minister of Japan from 1996 till his resignment from LDP presidency.
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Original:  He was the president of Liberal Democratic Party from 1995 till the lost of LDP at the election of the House of Councillors in 1998, and the Prime Minister of Japan from 1996 till his resignment from LDP presidency.
Revised:  He was the president of Liberal Democratic Party from 1995 until the the party lost at the election of the House of Councillors in 1998, and the Prime Minister of Japan from 1996 till his resignment from LDP presidency.
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Original:  He was the president of Liberal Democratic Party from 1995 till the lost of LDP at the election of the House of Councillors in 1998, and the Prime Minister of Japan from 1996 till his resignment from LDP presidency.
Revised:  He was the president of Liberal Democratic Party from 1995 till the lost of LDP at the election of the House of Councillors in 1998. He was also the Prime Minister of Japan from 1996 till his resignment from LDP presidency.
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Original:  In 2001 he ran again for the presidency of the party, but was defeated in the present Prime Minister Koizumi Junichiro
Revised:  In 2001 he ran again for the presidency of the party, but was defeated by the present Prime Minister Koizumi Junichiro
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Original: The next day of that announcement, on the 12th, the Liberal Democratic Party  executive committee showed they had no intention to recognize him as a candidate to proportional representative constituency.
Revised: The next day of that announcement, on the 12th, the Liberal Democratic Party (LDP) executive committee showed they had no intention to recognize him as a candidate to proportional representative constituency.
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Original:  There might be no possibility for him to run for the coming election as the Liberal Democratic Party (LDP) candidate and his political career would inevitably end.
Revised:  There might be no possibility for him to run for the coming election as the (LDP) candidate and his political career would inevitably end.
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Original:  There might be no possibility for him to run for the coming election as the (LDP ) candidate and his political career would inevitably end.
Revised:  There might be no possibility for him to run for the coming election as the LDP candidate and his political career would inevitably end.
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Original:  On the July, 2004 it was reported that Hashimoto did not state the donation of 1 hundred million yen from a lobbist organisation , in the annual political financial income and outgo report  which is legally mundatory to all minister and parliament speakers.
Revised:  On the July, 2004 it was reported that Hashimoto did not state the donation of 1 hundred million yen from a lobbist organisation in the annual political financial income and outgo report which is legally mundatory to all minister and parliament speakers.
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Original:  On the July, 2004 it was reported that Hashimoto did not state the donation of 1 hundred million yen from a lobbist organisation , in the annual political financial income and outgo report  which is legally mundatory to all minister and parliament speakers.
Revised:  On the July, 2004 it was reported that Hashimoto did not state the donation of 1 hundred million yen from a lobbist organisation , in the annual political financial income and outgo report , which is legally mundatory to all minister and parliament speakers.
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Original:  On the July, 2004 it was reported that Hashimoto did not state the donation of 1 hundred million yen from a lobbist organisation , in the annual political financial income and outgo report  which is legally mundatory to all minister and parliament speakers.
Revised:  On the July, 2004 it was reported that Hashimoto did not state the donation of 1 hundred million yen from a lobbist organisation , in the annual political financial income and outgo report which is legally mandatory to all minister and parliament speakers.
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Original:  Hashimoto had received that donation from  Japan Dental Political Federation, which has been one of his main supporting organisations.
Revised:  Hashimoto had received that donation from the Japan Dental Political Federation, which has been one of his main supporting organisations.
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Original:  Hashimoto had received that donation from  Japan Dental Political Federation, which has been one of his main supporting organisations.
Revised:  Hashimoto had received that donation from Japan Dental Political Federation, one of his main supporting organisations.
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Original:  In the same year, he ran for a constituency for which his father had run since the death in that year.
Revised:  In the same year, he ran for a constituency for which his father had run since his death in that year.
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Original:  He was also the Prime Minister of Japan from 1996 till his resignment from LDP presidency.
Revised:  He was also the Prime Minister of Japan from 1996 till his resignation from LDP presidency.
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Original: A youthful Ryutaro Hashimoto.
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Original: thumbnail|Cyclone Laila over India Cyclone Laila packing winds of 110 kilometres an hour closed in on India's east coast on Thursday as tens of thousands of people evacuated their homes  fearing major storm damage.
Revised: thumbnail|Cyclone Laila over India Cyclone Laila packing winds of 110 kilometres per hour closed in on India's east coast on Thursday as tens of thousands of people evacuated their homes fearing major storm damage.
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Original: thumbnail|Cyclone Laila over India Cyclone Laila packing winds of 110 kilometres an hour closed in on India's east coast on Thursday as tens of thousands of people evacuated their homes  fearing major storm damage.
Revised: thumbnail|Cyclone Laila over India Cyclone Laila packing winds of 110 kilometres an hour closed in on the east coast of India on Thursday as tens of thousands of people evacuated their homes fearing major storm damage.
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Original: thumbnail|Cyclone Laila over India Cyclone Laila packing winds of 110 kilometres an hour closed in on India's east coast on Thursday as tens of thousands of people evacuated their homes  fearing major storm damage.
Revised: thumbnail|Cyclone Laila over India Cyclone Laila packing winds of 110 kilometres an hour closed in on India's east coast on Thursday as tens of thousands of people evacuated their homes , fearing major storm damage.
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Original:  Cyclone Laila hit the state of Andhra Pradesh as heavy rain and strong gales battered the coast, state authorities said at least 30,000 people had been evacuated from low-lying areas.
Revised:  Laila hit the state of Andhra Pradesh as heavy rain and strong gales battered the coast, state authorities said at least 30,000 people had been evacuated from low-lying areas.
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Original: The Facebook user who created the group, entitled "Everybody Draw Mohammed Day |Everybody Draw Mohammed Day ", said that she had got the idea for the group after watching an episode of South Park on the television channel Comedy Central, in which a line involving the Prophet had been 'bleeped out'.
Revised: The Facebook user who created the group, entitled "Everybody Draw Mohammed Day ", said that she had got the idea for the group after watching an episode of South Park on the television channel Comedy Central, in which a line involving the Prophet had been 'bleeped out'.
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Original:  According to a spokesman, the agency only did so after "all possible" other options had been exhausted.
Revised:  According to a spokesman, the agency only did so after "all possible" options had been exhausted.
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Original:  Access to Wikipedia, Wikinews' daughter project, and Flickr, a photo sharing site, were also banned, on Thursday
Revised:  Access to Wikipedia, Wikinews' sister project, and Flickr, a photo sharing site, were also banned, on Thursday
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Original: The Pakistan Telecommunication Authority , the government agency responsible for the operation and maintenance of Pakistani telecommunications, ordered all internet service providers to "completely shut-down" all access to Facebook and YouTube from the interior of Pakistan.
Revised: The , the government agency responsible for the operation and maintenance of Pakistani telecommunications, ordered all internet service providers to "completely shut-down" all access to Facebook and YouTube from the interior of Pakistan.
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Original:  Access to Wikipedia, Wikinews' sister project, and Flickr , a photo sharing site, were also banned, on Thursday
Revised:  Access to Wikipedia, Wikinews' sister project, and , a photo sharing site, were also banned, on Thursday
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Original: | In a policy change prompted by activists staying in Gaza to protest Israel's plan to close Jewish settlements there, Israel announced that nonresidents will not be allowed into the territory.
Revised:  In a policy change prompted by activists staying in Gaza to protest Israel's plan to close Jewish settlements there, Israel announced that nonresidents will not be allowed into the territory.
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Original: | In a policy change prompted by activists staying in Gaza to protest Israel's plan to close Jewish settlements there, Israel announced that nonresidents will not be allowed into the territory.
Revised: | In a policy change prompted by activists staying in Gaza protesting Israel's plan to close Jewish settlements there, Israel announced that nonresidents will not be allowed into the territory.
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Original:  Israel's Southern Command on Thursday announced "only residents of the Israeli communities in the Gaza Strip will be allowed " entry into Gaza  , where the Jewish state plans to end its decades-long presence.
Revised:  Israel's Southern Command on Thursday announced "only residents of the Israeli communities in the Gaza Strip will be allowed entry into Gaza , where the Jewish state plans to end its decades-long presence.
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Original:  Israel's Southern Command on Thursday announced "only residents of the Israeli communities in the Gaza Strip will be allowed " entry into Gaza  , where the Jewish state plans to end its decades-long presence.
Revised:  Israel's Southern Command on Thursday announced "only residents of the Israeli communities in the Gaza Strip will be allowed " entry into Gaza " , where the Jewish state plans to end its decades-long presence.
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Original:  US Ambassador to France ;
Revised:  Ambassador to France ;
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Original:  The protestors, led by members of the newly-registered Maldivian Democratic Party, reportedly were demanding the release of political prisoners and the resignation of the President Maumoon Abdul Gayoom .
Revised:  The protestors, led by members of the newly-registered Maldivian Democratic Party, reportedly were demanding the release of political prisoners and the president's resignation .
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Original: Pro-democracy demonstrations took place throughout the atoll nation of Maldives today, ousting the authoritarian president Maumoon Abdul Gayoom.
Revised: Pro-democracy demonstrations took place throughout the atoll nation of Maldives today, endangering the rule of authoritarian president Maumoon Abdul Gayoom.
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Original:  After a September 3 deadline, Iran again faces a possible referral to the U.N. Security Council where it could face economic sanctions.
Revised:  After a September 3 deadline, Iran again faces a possible referral to the U.N. Security Council where it could be subject to economic sanctions.
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Original:  The board also requested a report from the agency ’ s chief, Mohamed ElBaradei, on its compliance by Tehran.
Revised:  The board also requested a report from the agency ' s chief, Mohamed ElBaradei, on its compliance by Tehran.
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Original: Investigators are questioning museum staff after speculation that the perpetrator may have had assistance from somebody on "the inside" further fuelled by reports in French newspaper Le Parisien that the electronic alarm system at the museum had not worked in two months .
Revised: Investigators are questioning museum staff after speculation that the perpetrator may have had assistance from somebody on "the inside" .
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Original:  The investigation into the thefts is being led by the Brigade de Répression du Banditisme, an elite French police unit and the museum will remain closed until investigations are complete
Revised:  The investigation into the thefts is being led by the Brigade de Répression du Banditisme, an elite French police unit 
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Original:  Five paintings, in total valued at almost €100 million  were stolen from the Musée d'Art Moderne de la Ville de Paris overnight on Wednesday.
Revised:  Five paintings, in total valued at almost €100 million . were stolen from the Musée d'Art Moderne de la Ville de Paris overnight on Wednesday.
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Original:  The thief is believed to have entered the museum by climbing through a window and the museum is investigating how the theft took place despite the rpesence of guards and a complex security system.
Revised:  The thief is believed to have entered the museum by climbing through a window and the museum is investigating how the theft took place despite the presence of guards and a complex security system.
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Original:  The APris prosecutor's office said that a single masked man was captured on CCTV walking away with the works, which had been removed from their frames with care rather than being slice out.
Revised:  The Paris prosecutor's office said that a single masked man was captured on CCTV walking away with the works, which had been removed from their frames with care rather than being slice out.
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Original:  The APris prosecutor's office said that a single masked man was captured on CCTV walking away with the works, which had been removed from their frames with care rather than being slice out.
Revised:  The APris prosecutor's office said that a single masked man was captured on CCTV walking away with the works, which had been removed from their frames with care rather than being sliced out.
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Original: Deputy culture secretary at the Paris Town Hall, Christophe Girard told a press conference: "This is a serious crime to the heritage of humanity", adding that the perpetrator or perpetrators were "obviously organised".
Revised: Christophe Girard, deputy mayor of Paris with responsibility for culture, told a press conference: "This is a serious crime to the heritage of humanity", adding that the perpetrator or perpetrators were "obviously organised".
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Original:  He added "Wildlife criminals must expect no sympathy from now on.  
Revised:  He added "Wildlife criminals must expect no sympathy from now on. " 
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Original: ]] David McKie, defending, detailed other sanctions to the court his client had already suffered.
Revised: ]] David McKie, defending, detailed other sanctions his client had already suffered.
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Original:  It is therefore ranked as least concern by the 's . However, the bird does face persecution and egg-robbing by humans.
Revised:  It is therefore ranked as least concern by the 's . However, the bird does face persecution and nest robbing by humans.
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Original:  It is going to be the follow-up to last year's studio album The Houses of the Molé, which was not successful as their breakthrough album like 1992's Psalm 69: The Way to Succeed and the Way to Suck Eggs.
Revised:  It is going to be the follow-up to last year's studio album The Houses of the Molé, which was not successful as any one of their breakthrough albums like 1992's Psalm 69: The Way to Succeed and the Way to Suck Eggs.
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Original:   Only passengers with reconfirmed reservations have been allowed to board flights at Heathrow.
Revised:  Only passengers with confirmed reservations have been allowed to board flights at Heathrow.
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Original: As a result of BA staff at Heathrow joining Gate Gourmet's staff in  strike action, BA are running  of their short-haul flights, and 40\% of their long haul flights today from 0600 BST/UTC+1.
Revised: As a result of British Airways (BA) staff at Heathrow joining Gate Gourmet's staff in strike action, BA are running of their short-haul flights, and 40\% of their long haul flights today from 0600 BST/UTC+1.
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Original: As a result of BA staff at Heathrow joining Gate Gourmet's staff in  strike action, BA are running  of their short-haul flights, and 40\% of their long haul flights today from 0600 BST/UTC+1.
Revised: As a result of BA staff at Heathrow joining Gate Gourmet's staff in the strike action, BA are running of their short-haul flights, and 40\% of their long haul flights today from 0600 BST/UTC+1.
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Original: A study in the UK has found that the so called health inequality gap between rich and poor, measured by infant mortality and life expectancy, has increased.
Revised: A study in the UK has found that a so called "health inequality" gap between rich and poor, measured by infant mortality and life expectancy, has increased.
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Original:  Progress in narrowing the gap has been made in on child poverty and improving housing  as well as related to cancer and heart disease death rates.
Revised:  Progress in narrowing the gap has been made on child poverty and improving housing as well as related to cancer and heart disease death rates.
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Original:  Progress in narrowing the gap has been made in on child poverty and improving housing  as well as related to cancer and heart disease death rates.
Revised:  Progress in narrowing the gap has been made in on child poverty and improving housing , as well as related to cancer and heart disease death rates.
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Original:  Progress in narrowing the gap has been made in on child poverty and improving housing  as well as related to cancer and heart disease death rates.
Revised:  Progress in narrowing the gap has been made in on child poverty and improving housing as well as cancer and heart disease death rates.
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Original:  In a response, the public health minister, Caroline Flint, said so-called health trainers would be sent provided for poorer areas (along with extra funding) in order to help people adopt "a healthier way of life".
Revised:  The public health minister, Caroline Flint, said so-called health trainers would be sent provided for poorer areas (along with extra funding) in order to help people adopt "a healthier way of life".
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Original:  In a response, the public health minister, Caroline Flint, said so-called health trainers would be sent provided for poorer areas (along with extra funding) in order to help people adopt "a healthier way of life".
Revised:  In a response, the public health minister, Caroline Flint, said so-called "health trainers" would be provided for poorer areas (along with extra funding) in order to help people adopt "a healthier way of life".
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Original:  Meanwhile, concerns have also been raised about the level of healthcare in Austria.
Revised:  Concerns have also been raised about the level of healthcare in Austria.
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Original:  Meanwhile, concerns have also been raised about the level of healthcare in Austria.
Revised:  Meanwhile, concerns have also been raised about the level of health care in Austria.
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Original: A study in the UK has found that a so called "health inequality " gap between rich and poor, measured by infant mortality and life expectancy, has increased.
Revised: A study in the UK has found that a so called "health inequality gap" between rich and poor, measured by infant mortality and life expectancy, has increased.
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Original:  users have reported the earthquake was felt in Colina, Santiago (Santiago Metropolitan), Curicó (Maule), Machalí, Rengo, Rancagua , O'Higgins  and Valparaíso (Valparaíso).
Revised:  users have reported the earthquake was felt in Colina, Santiago (Santiago Metropolitan), Curicó (Maule), Machalí, Rengo, Rancagua ( O'Higgins and Valparaíso (Valparaíso).
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Original:  users have reported the earthquake was felt in Colina, Santiago (Santiago Metropolitan), Curicó (Maule), Machalí, Rengo, Rancagua , O'Higgins  and Valparaíso (Valparaíso).
Revised:  users have reported the earthquake was felt in Colina, Santiago (Santiago Metropolitan), Curicó (Maule), Machalí, Rengo, Rancagua , O'Higgins ), and Valparaíso (Valparaíso).
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