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Original: Biography Family and Descendancy Acaimo or Acaymo was a Guanche mencey of Tacoronte, on the island of Tenerife at the time of the Spanish conquest in the 15th century.
Revised: Biography Acaimo or Acaymo was a Guanche mencey of Tacoronte, on the island of Tenerife at the time of the Spanish conquest in the 15th century.
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Original:   Acaimo descended from the first mencey of Tacoronte, which was named Rumen by Juan Núñez de la PeñaConquista y antiguedades de las islas de la Gran Canaria y su descripción, con muchas advertencias de sus privilegios, conquistadores, pobladores, y otras particularidades en la muy poderosa isla de Tenerife During the division of the island, which occurred after the death of his father, Tinerfe the Great, in the late fourteenth century, Acaimo took his father's territory.
Revised:  Biography Family and Descendancy Acaimo descended from the first mencey of Tacoronte, which was named Rumen by Juan Núñez de la PeñaConquista y antiguedades de las islas de la Gran Canaria y su descripción, con muchas advertencias de sus privilegios, conquistadores, pobladores, y otras particularidades en la muy poderosa isla de Tenerife During the division of the island, which occurred after the death of his father, Tinerfe the Great, in the late fourteenth century, Acaimo took his father's territory.
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Original:  which was named Rumen by Juan Núñez de la PeñaConquista y antiguedades de las islas de la Gran Canaria y su descripción, con muchas advertencias de sus privilegios, conquistadores, pobladores, y otras particularidades en la muy poderosa isla de Tenerife During the division of the island, which occurred after the death of his father, Tinerfe the Great, in the late fourteenth century, Acaimo took his father's territory.
Revised:  who was called "Rumén" or "Romén" by Juan Núñez de la PeñaConquista y antiguedades de las islas de la Gran Canaria y su descripción, con muchas advertencias de sus privilegios, conquistadores, pobladores, y otras particularidades en la muy poderosa isla de Tenerife During the division of the island, which occurred after the death of his father, Tinerfe the Great, in the late fourteenth century, Acaimo took his father's territory.
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Original:  which was named Rumen by Juan Núñez de la PeñaConquista y antiguedades de las islas de la Gran Canaria y su descripción, con muchas advertencias de sus privilegios, conquistadores, pobladores, y otras particularidades en la muy poderosa isla de Tenerife During the division of the island, which occurred after the death of his father, Tinerfe the Great, in the late fourteenth century, Acaimo took his father's territory.
Revised:  which was named Rumen by Juan Núñez de la Peña.Conquista y antiguedades de las islas de la Gran Canaria y su descripción, con muchas advertencias de sus privilegios, conquistadores, pobladores, y otras particularidades en la muy poderosa isla de Tenerife During the division of the island, which occurred after the death of his father, Tinerfe the Great, in the late fourteenth century, Acaimo took his father's territory.
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Original:  The play was published by Writers URL / 9788171894413 / 81-7189-441-0 Jaime Valfredo Rangel presented a paper in tribute of his 200th birth anniversary to the Governor of Portuguese India  Paulo Bernard Guedes.
Revised:  The play was published by Writers URL / 9788171894413 / 81-7189-441-0 Jaime Valfredo Rangel presented a paper in tribute of his 200th birth anniversary to the Governor of Portuguese India , Paulo Bernard Guedes.
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Original:  The Mustard Seed Art Company, a theater group from Goa, celebrated the 250th anniversary of Faria's birth by staging a play entitled Kator Re Bhaji, which was written and directed by Isabel de Santa Rita Vaz . Laurent Carrer included the first English translation of Faria's single tome, originally written in French as De la cause du sommeil lucide ou Etude de la nature de l’homme (On the Cause of Lucid Sleep or Study On The Nature of Man) in his 2004 José Custódio de Faria:
Revised:  The Mustard Seed Art Company, a theater group from Goa, celebrated the 250th anniversary of Faria's birth by staging a play entitled Kator Re Bhaji, which was written and directed by Isabel de Santa Rita Vas . Laurent Carrer included the first English translation of Faria's single tome, originally written in French as De la cause du sommeil lucide ou Etude de la nature de l’homme (On the Cause of Lucid Sleep or Study On The Nature of Man) in his 2004 José Custódio de Faria:
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Original:  The article is included in the book Reflected in Water edited by Jerry Pinto , published by Penguin Books India 2006.
Revised:  The article is included in the book Reflected in Water edited by Jerry Pinto .
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Original:  The play was published by Writers URL / 9788171894413 / 81-7189-441-0 Jaime Valfredo Rangel presented a paper in tribute of his 200th birth anniversary to the Governor of Portuguese India, Paulo Bernard Guedes.
Revised:  The play was published by Writers Workshop. Jaime Valfredo Rangel presented a paper in tribute of his 200th birth anniversary to the Governor of Portuguese India, Paulo Bernard Guedes.
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Original:  Otherwise, the character has not a strong resemblance to his historical analogue.
Revised:  Otherwise, the character does not have a strong resemblance to his historical analogue.
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Original: Origins Statue of Abbé Faria hypnotising a woman next to the Old Secretariat (Idalçao palace) in Panjim, Goa José Custódio de Faria was born in Candolim, Bardez in the erstwhile territory of Portuguese Goa, on 31 May 1756.
Revised: Early life José Custódio de Faria was born in Candolim, Bardez in the erstwhile territory of Portuguese Goa, on 31 May 1756.
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Original:  Since his parents had irreconcilable differences , they decided to separate and obtained the Church's dispensation.
Revised:  Since his parents fought all the time , they decided to separate and obtained the Church's dispensation.
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Original:  Caetano Vitorino joined the seminary to complete his studies for the priesthood ( which he had interrupted to get married), and Rosa Maria became a nun, joining the St.
Revised:  Caetano Vitorino joined the seminary to study for the priesthood ( which he had interrupted to get married), and Rosa Maria became a nun, joining the St.
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Original:  Monica convent in Old Goa , where she rose to the position of prioress .
Revised:  Monica Convent in Old Goa , where she rose to the position of prioress .
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Original:  Monica convent in Old Goa , where she rose to the position of prioress .
Revised:  Monica convent in Old Goa .
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Original:  Alexandre Dumas' 1844 novel The Count of Monte Cristo features a prominent character named Abbé Faria, who was imprisoned in the Chateau d’If in solitary confinement but released , and he learned a certain self-control while imprisoned.
Revised:  Alexandre Dumas' 1844 novel The Count of Monte Cristo features a prominent character named Abbé Faria, who was imprisoned in the Chateau d’If in solitary confinement , and he learned a certain self-control while imprisoned.
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Original: Tributes There is a bronze statue  in central Panjim, Goa  (next to the former Government Secretariat or Idalçao palace)of Abbé Faria trying to hypnotise a woman .
Revised: Tributes There is a bronze statue of Abbé Faria trying to hypnotise a woman in central Panjim, Goa (next to the former Government Secretariat or Idalçao palace)of Abbé Faria trying to hypnotise a woman .
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Original: Tributes There is a bronze statue  in central Panjim, Goa  (next to the former Government Secretariat or Idalçao palace)of Abbé Faria trying to hypnotise a woman .
Revised: Tributes There is a bronze statue in central Panjim, Goa , India (next to the former Government Secretariat or Idalçao palace)of Abbé Faria trying to hypnotise a woman .
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Original: Tributes There is a bronze statue  in central Panjim, Goa  (next to the former Government Secretariat or Idalçao palace)of Abbé Faria trying to hypnotise a woman .
Revised: Tributes There is a bronze statue in central Panjim, Goa (next to the former Government Secretariat or Idalcão palace) .
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Original:  Portugal commemorated the 250th anniversary of the Abbé's birth in May 2006 by releasing a postcard of his statue in Panjim, Goa .
Revised:  Portugal commemorated the 250th anniversary of the Abbé's birth in May 2006 by releasing a postcard (featuring his statue in Panjim, Goa .
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Original:  A prominent thoroughfare in the southern Goan city of Margao  is named 'Rua Abade Faria' (Abbé Faria Street) in his honour.
Revised:  A prominent thoroughfare in the city of Margao is named 'Rua Abade Faria' (Abbé Faria Street) in his honour.
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Original:  Asif Currimbhoy in his play Abbé Faria  dramatizes Faria's life and views as a revolutionary priest and premier hypnotist.
Revised:  Abbé Faria dramatizes Faria's life and views as a revolutionary priest and premier hypnotist.
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Original:  The play was published by Writers Workshop.
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Original:  The Institute of Clinical Hypnosis and Counselling  established in the Indian state of Kerala is a memorial to Abbé Faria.
Revised:  The Institute of Clinical Hypnosis and Counselling was established in the Indian state of Kerala is a memorial to Abbé Faria.
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Original:  The Institute of Clinical Hypnosis and Counselling  established in the Indian state of Kerala is a memorial to Abbé Faria.
Revised:  The Institute of Clinical Hypnosis and Counselling established in the Indian state of Kerala as a memorial to Abbé Faria.
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Original:  The Mustard Seed Art Company, a theater group from Goa,  celebrated the 250th anniversary of Faria's birth by staging a play entitled Kator Re Bhaji, which was written and directed by Isabel de Santa Rita Vas . Laurent Carrer included the first English translation of Faria's single tome, originally written in French as De la cause du sommeil lucide ou Etude de la nature de l’homme (On the Cause of Lucid Sleep or Study On The Nature of Man) in his 2004 José Custódio de Faria:
Revised:  The Mustard Seed Art Company, a theater group from Goa, which celebrated the 250th anniversary of Faria's birth by staging a play entitled Kator Re Bhaji, which was written and directed by Isabel de Santa Rita Vas . Laurent Carrer included the first English translation of Faria's single tome, originally written in French as De la cause du sommeil lucide ou Etude de la nature de l’homme (On the Cause of Lucid Sleep or Study On The Nature of Man) in his 2004 José Custódio de Faria:
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Original:  The Mustard Seed Art Company, a theater group from Goa,  celebrated the 250th anniversary of Faria's birth by staging a play entitled Kator Re Bhaji, which was written and directed by Isabel de Santa Rita Vas . Laurent Carrer included the first English translation of Faria's single tome, originally written in French as De la cause du sommeil lucide ou Etude de la nature de l’homme (On the Cause of Lucid Sleep or Study On The Nature of Man) in his 2004 José Custódio de Faria:
Revised:  The Mustard Seed Art Company, a theater group from Goa, celebrated the 250th anniversary of Faria's birth . Laurent Carrer included the first English translation of Faria's single tome, originally written in French as De la cause du sommeil lucide ou Etude de la nature de l’homme (On the Cause of Lucid Sleep or Study On The Nature of Man) in his 2004 José Custódio de Faria:
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Original:  Commemorative postcard  honouring the Abbé's 250th Anniversary.
Revised:  Commemorative postcard , honouring the Abbé's 250th Anniversary.
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Original:  A city road in the Areeiro zone of Lisbon is also named in his honour.
Revised:  A street in the Areeiro zone of Lisbon is also named in his honour.
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Original:  An English translation of this work, including Dalgado's preface, can be found in  Carrer's " José Custódio de Faria: Hypnotist,Priest and Revolutionary. " 
Revised:  An English translation of this work, including Dalgado's preface, can be found in Laurent Carrer's " José Custódio de Faria: Hypnotist,Priest and Revolutionary. " 
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Original: Splay is a physiological term that refers to the difference between urine threshold (the amount of a substance required in the kidneys before it appears in the urine) and saturation, or TM ;
Revised: In physiology, splay is the difference between urine threshold (the amount of a substance required in the kidneys before it appears in the urine) and saturation, or TM ;
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Original:  Deception of the Novelist The Rookies Nezha TV series Year Title Role Channel 2005 Hala哈拉教父 Cameo role 2007 Kung Fu Beggar 功夫狀元 "Nip Siu-lung"
Revised:  Deception of the Novelist The Rookies Nezha Television Year Title Role Channel 2005 Hala哈拉教父 Cameo role 2007 Kung Fu Beggar 功夫狀元 "Nip Siu-lung"
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Original:  Chan has sparked controversy for his pro-Beijing stance, after outspokenly being supportive of the Hong Kong police during the 2019 Hong Kong Protests, posting on social media that police should not "go easy on any [protesters]" nor "let any one of them URL
Revised:  Chan has sparked controversy for his pro-Beijing stance, after outspokenly being supportive of the Hong Kong police during the 2019 Hong Kong Protests, posting on social media that police should not "go easy on any [protesters]" nor "let any one of them go".
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Original:  He first came to prominence for acting in two films directed by Stephen Chow - as the goalkeeper "Empty Hand" in Shaolin Soccer (2001), and as the Axe Gang boss Brother Sum in Kung Fu Hustle (2004).
Revised:  He first came to prominence for acting in two films directed by Stephen Chow — as the goalkeeper "Empty Hand" in Shaolin Soccer (2001), and as the Axe Gang boss Brother Sum in Kung Fu Hustle (2004).
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Original:  The population of Vachi accounts for 7.3\% of the district's total population  .
Revised:  The population of Vachi accounts for 7.3\% of that number. .
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Original:  There is also a historical Mountain Jewish  in Kulinsky.
Revised:  There is also a historical Mountain Jewish presence in Kulinsky.
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Original:  Population: The population of Kumukh accounts for 15.9\% of the district's total population  .
Revised:  Population: The population of Kumukh accounts for 15.9\% of that number. .
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Original:  Ernouf assembled a force of a thousand men and joined Jean Nicholas Houchard;
Revised:  Ernouf assembled a force of a thousand men and joined Jean Nicolas Houchard;
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Original: It was also by his advice that the commander in chief , Jean-Baptiste Jourdan, discovered Josias, Prince of Coburg's unfortunate position behind the Wattignies forest, compelled him to retreat across the Sambre and subsequently lifted the siege of Maubeuge: Ernouf's part in this action, the Battle of Hondschoote, earned him his promotion to Major General on 23 frimaire an II (13 December 1793).
Revised: It was also by his advice that the commander-in-chief , Jean-Baptiste Jourdan, discovered Josias, Prince of Coburg's unfortunate position behind the Wattignies forest, compelled him to retreat across the Sambre and subsequently lifted the siege of Maubeuge: Ernouf's part in this action, the Battle of Hondschoote, earned him his promotion to Major General on 23 frimaire an II (13 December 1793).
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Original:  Upon his reinstatement, he was appointed Chief of Staff of the Army of the Moselle and the army of Sambre and Meuse .
Revised:  Upon his reinstatement, he was appointed Chief of Staff of the Army of the Moselle and the Army of Sambre-et-Meuse .
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Original: Bibliography Adkins, Roy and Lesley.
Revised: References Adkins, Roy and Lesley.
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Original:  The privateer ship General Ernouf (formerly the British purchased sloop-of-war HMS Lilly), further underscores his possible commitment to privateering as a legitimate military means.
Revised:  Four privateer ships bore the name General Ernouf (formerly the British purchased sloop-of-war HMS Lilly), further underscores his possible commitment to privateering as a legitimate military means.
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Original:  Four privateer ships  bore the name General Ernouf(formerly the British purchased sloop-of-war HMS Lilly), further underscores his possible commitment to privateeringas a legitimate military means.
Revised:  Four privateer ships bore the name Général Ernouf, one of which was the captured sloop-of-war HMS Lilly), further underscores his possible commitment to privateeringas a legitimate military means.
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Original:  The capture of the French colony on Martinique by the British in 1809 marked a critical point for the French force on Guadeloupe;
Revised:  The British capture of Martinique in 1809 marked a critical point for the French force on Guadeloupe;
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Original:  The capture of the French colony on Martinique by the British in 1809 marked a critical point for the French force on Guadeloupe;
Revised:  The capture of the French colony on Martinique by the British in 1809 marked a critical point for the French on Guadeloupe;
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Original: Within a year, burning leaving resistants that didn't want to go back in plantations , Ernouf had restored slave order and agricultural production.
Revised: Within a year, after burning former slaves who refused to go back in plantations , Ernouf had restored slave order and agricultural production.
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Original: Within a year, burning leaving resistants that didn't want to go back in plantations , Ernouf had restored slave order and agricultural production.
Revised: Within a year, burning leaving resistants that didn't want to go back to the plantations plantations , Ernouf had restored slave order and agricultural production.
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Original: Within a year, burning leaving resistants that didn't want to go back in plantations , Ernouf had restored slave order and agricultural production.
Revised: Within a year, burning leaving resistants that didn't want to go back in plantations , Ernouf had restored slavery and agricultural production.
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Original:  From his base on Guadeloupe, he dealt largely with many of the refugee planters who escaped the previous years' carnage.
Revised:  From his base on Guadeloupe, he dealt generously with many of the refugee planters who escaped the previous years' carnage.
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Original:  He also mastered the Swedish island of St. Barts, where the rebels of St. Domingo had taken refuge, and from which they coordinated privateering against British and American shipping.
Revised:  He also took over the Swedish island of St. Barts, where the rebels of St. Domingo had taken refuge, and from which they coordinated privateering against British and American shipping.
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Original:  To protect Guadeloupe, he raised coastal batteries.
Revised:  To protect Guadeloupe, he established coastal batteries.
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Original:  Sir Alexander Cochrane's naval force landed 11,000 British troops under the command of Lieutenant General George Beckwith at the so-called Capesterre, or the eastern side of the islands.
Revised:  Sir Alexander Cochrane's naval force landed 11,000 British troops under the command of Lieutenant General George Beckwith landed at Capesterre, or the eastern side of the islands.
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Original:  Attacked on three sides at the end of January  , Ernouff's force mounted a spirited, although short , defense and capitulated on 6 February 1810, after which he was transported to Britain.
Revised:  Attacked on three sides at the end of January 1810 , Ernouff's force mounted a spirited, although short , defense and capitulated on 6 February 1810, after which he was transported to Britain.
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Original:  Attacked on three sides at the end of January  , Ernouff's force mounted a spirited, although short , defense and capitulated on 6 February 1810, after which he was transported to Britain.
Revised:  Attacked on three sides at the end of January , Ernouff's force mounted a spirited, although short defense and capitulated on 6 February 1810, after which he was transported to Britain.
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Original:  Mullié, "Jean Ernouf". upright=1.50|alt=A crowd gathers around a throne, as a man dressed in military uniform receives an award;
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Original: Helmrich is famous for perfecting the 'Single Camera Shot ' filming style and his related technical camera innovations. "...you can move inside an event and go with your camera to the right spot, at the right moment,...
Revised: Helmrich is famous for perfecting the 'Single Shot Cinema' filming method and his related technical camera innovations. "...you can move inside an event and go with your camera to the right spot, at the right moment,...
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Original:  According to Bazin, a moving camera is the essence of documentary filmmaking: “It should not cut up reality, but rather it should show reality in its temporal continuity.”
Revised:  According to Bazin, a moving camera is the essence of filmmaking: “It should not cut up reality, but rather it should show reality in its temporal continuity.”
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Original:  for best documentary 2004 for Flight from Heaven 2004 Awards 'Shape of the Moon (Stand van de Maan) Opening film IDFA, Amsterdam 2004 Grand Joris Ivens Award IDFA, Amsterdam 2004 Grand World Documentary Award Sundance Film festival 2005, USA Best Cinematography Award International Documentary Film festival Chicago 2005, USA Opening film International Film Festival Bermuda 2005 Grand Jury Award Full Frame USA Crystal Film Award the Netherlands Asja.biz Prize –
Revised:  for best documentary 2004 for Flight from Heaven 2004 Awards 'Shape of the Moon (Stand van de Maan) Opening film IDFA, Amsterdam 2004 Grand Joris Ivens Award IDFA, Amsterdam 2004 World Cinema Jury Prize Documentary Sundance Film festival 2005, USA Best Cinematography Award International Documentary Film festival Chicago 2005, USA Opening film International Film Festival Bermuda 2005 Grand Jury Award Full Frame USA Crystal Film Award the Netherlands Asja.biz Prize –
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Original:  Grand Golden Dhow Best Documentary award at the Zanzibar International Film festival 2006 for Promised Paradise 2010 Awards Position Among the Stars (Stand van de Sterren) Opening film IDFA, Amsterdam 2010 Grand VPRO/IDFA Award, Amsterdam 2010 Award Best Dutch Documentary, Amsterdam 2010 Award Sundance Special Jury Award 2011 Grand Big Stamp Award ZagrebDocs Croatia 
Revised:  Grand Golden Dhow Best Documentary award at the Zanzibar International Film festival 2006 for Promised Paradise 2010 Awards Position Among the Stars (Stand van de Sterren) Opening film IDFA, Amsterdam 2010 Grand VPRO/IDFA Award, Amsterdam 2010 Award Best Dutch Documentary, Amsterdam 2010 World Cinema Documentary Special Jury Prize Sundance Film festival 2011 Grand Big Stamp Award ZagrebDocs Croatia 
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Original:  In January 2011 he won again at Sundance where he recieved the World Cinema Documentary Special Jury Prize for Position among the Stars.
Revised:  In January 2011 he won again at Sundance where he received the World Cinema Documentary Special Jury Prize for Position among the Stars.
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Original: Leonard Retel Helmrich is a Dutch cinematographer and film director of Indo descent .
Revised: Leonard Retel Helmrich is a Dutch cinematographer and film director .
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