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Original:  ” He called on all parties “ to respect strictly the arms embargo, exercise maximum restraint, avoid provocative actions and display responsibility in implementing resolution 1701.
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Original:  ” He called on all parties “ to respect strictly the arms embargo, exercise maximum restraint, avoid provocative actions and display responsibility in implementing resolution 1701.
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Original:  Wishing the soldiers well, Defence Minister BrendanNelson says there is a high risk associated with the mission.
Revised:  Wishing the soldiers well, Brendan_Nelson says there is a high risk associated with the mission.
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Original:  Defence says the RTF will form a key part of the Netherlands-led Provincial Reconstruction Team (PRT) in the Oruzgan province under the NATO-led International Security Assistance Force.
Revised:  Defence says the RTF will form a key part of the Netherlands-led Provincial Reconstruction Team in the Oruzgan province under the NATO-led International Security Assistance Force.
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Original:  The Age reports the Howard Government has kept secret how soldiers suffered the wounds  or the extent or nature of the wounds.
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Original:  The Age reports the Howard Government has kept secret how soldiers suffered the wounds  or the extent or nature of the wounds.
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Original:  Dr Nelson says the Australian contribution will also include skills training for the local population to ensure the benefits of the deployment continue long after our personnel have returned home  
Revised:  Dr Nelson says the Australian contribution will also include skills training for the local population to ensure the benefits of the deployment continue long after our personnel have returned home . 
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Original: 400 Australian soldiers have been officially farewelled at parade in Darwin, NT, ahead of their deployment to 2001_war_in_Afghanistan on Tuesday.
Revised: 400 Australian soldiers have been officially farewelled at parade in Darwin, NT, ahead of their deployment to Afghanistan on Tuesday.
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Original:  "They will go beginning this week and be deployed over the next few weeks , and I think every Australian should be extremely proud of the task that they are about to undertake ." Defence says the RTF will form a key part of the Netherlands-led Provincial Reconstruction Team in the Oruzgan province under the NATO-led International Security Assistance Force .
Revised:  "They will go beginning this week and be deployed over the next few weeks ." Defence says the RTF will form a key part of the Netherlands-led Provincial Reconstruction Team in the Oruzgan province under the NATO-led International Security Assistance Force .
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Original:  "They will go beginning this week and be deployed over the next few weeks , and I think every Australian should be extremely proud of the task that they are about to undertake ." Defence says the RTF will form a key part of the Netherlands-led Provincial Reconstruction Team in the Oruzgan province under the NATO-led International Security Assistance Force .
Revised:  "They will go beginning this week and be deployed over the next few weeks , and I think every Australian should be extremely proud of the task that they are about to undertake ." Defence says the RTF will form part of the Netherlands-led Provincial Reconstruction Team in the Oruzgan province under the NATO-led International Security Assistance Force .
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Original:  "They will go beginning this week and be deployed over the next few weeks , and I think every Australian should be extremely proud of the task that they are about to undertake ." Defence says the RTF will form a key part of the Netherlands-led Provincial Reconstruction Team in the Oruzgan province under the NATO-led International Security Assistance Force .
Revised:  "They will go beginning this week and be deployed over the next few weeks , and I think every Australian should be extremely proud of the task that they are about to undertake ." Defence says the RTF will form a key part of the Netherlands-led Provincial Reconstruction Team in the Oruzgan province under NATO .
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Original:  A contingent of 190 Australian special forces, supported by a 110-member helicopter detachment, has suffered a steady flow of casualties in the country since last September , with 11 wounded — a rate of one a month.
Revised:  A contingent of 190 Australian special forces, supported by a 110-member helicopter detachment, has suffered a steady flow of casualties since September year , with 11 wounded — a rate of one a month.
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Original:  Dr Nelson said the soldiers farewelled yesterday would perform command, construction, communications intelligence, protection and logistics support.
Revised:  Dr Nelson said the soldiers would perform command, construction, communications intelligence, protection and logistics support.
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Original:  Dr Nelson says the Australian contribution will also include skills training for the local population to  ensure the benefits of the deployment continue long after our personnel have returned home.
Revised:  Dr Nelson says the Australian contribution will also include skills training for the local population to " ensure the benefits of the deployment continue long after our personnel have returned home.
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Original:  Four Australian soldiers were injured in a rocket attack in Baghdad on August 14, when three rockets were fired into the city’s fortified international zone
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Original:  The defence counsel has labelled the "submission bloody minded ." Rob Stary said the defence team would counter with arguments that prosecutors withheld a statement from a prisoner now held overseas.
Revised:  The defence counsel has labelled the submission "bloody-minded ." Rob Stary said the defence team would counter with arguments that prosecutors withheld a statement from a prisoner now held overseas.
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Original: The men were first seen by the Australian Customs Service at Ashmore Reef, 610km north of Broome,  on Sunday, August 13.
Revised: The men were first spotted by the Australian Customs Service at Ashmore Reef, 610km north of Broome, on Sunday, August 13.
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Original: The men were first seen by the Australian Customs Service at Ashmore Reef, 610km north of Broome,  on Sunday, August 13.
Revised: The men were first seen by the Australian Customs Service at Ashmore Reef, 610km north of Broome, WA on Sunday, August 13.
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Original:  They were sent  to Christmas Island  2,400 km northwest of Perth, WA and 500 km south of Jakarta, Indonesia.
Revised:  They were sent to Christmas Island - 2,400 km northwest of Perth, WA and 500 km south of Jakarta, Indonesia.
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Original:  They were sent  to Christmas Island  2,400 km northwest of Perth, WA and 500 km south of Jakarta, Indonesia.
Revised:  They were sent to Christmas Island 2,400 km northwest of Perth, and 500 km south of Jakarta, Indonesia.
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Original:  600px|Location of remote island of Nauru, where Australia is sending 8 Burmese refugees According to The Age newspaper, the men are from a refugee camp on the Thai-Burmese border, and were suspected to be from the Karen tribe, who are battling Burma's brutal military Government.
Revised:  According to The Age newspaper, the men are from a refugee camp on the Thai-Burmese border, and were suspected to be from the Karen tribe, who are battling Burma's brutal military Government.
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Original:  600px|Location of remote island of Nauru, where Australia is sending 8 Burmese refugees According to The Age newspaper, the men are from a refugee camp on the Thai-Burmese border, and were suspected to be from the Karen tribe, who are battling Burma's brutal military Government.
Revised:  600px|Location of remote island of Nauru, where Australia is sending 8 Burmese refugees According to The Age newspaper, the men are from a refugee camp on the Thai-Burmese border, and may be from the Karen tribe, who are battling Burma's brutal military Government.
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Original:  David Manne, principal solicitor at the Melbourne-based Refugee and Immigration Legal Centre, said the other six were likely to do the same.
Revised:  David Manne, from Melbourne-based Refugee and Immigration Legal Centre, said the other six were likely to do the same.
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Original:  The men were first spotted by the Australian Customs Service at Ashmore Reef, 610km north of Broome, WA on Sunday, August 13.
Revised:  The men were first spotted by the Australian Customs Service at Ashmore Reef, 610km north of Broome, WA on August 13.
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Original:  The Australian Government claims advice from ASIO that the man may be a "security threat.  
Revised:  The Australian Government claims advice from ASIO that the man may be a "security threat. " 
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Original:  Two of the men have contacted immigration lawyers  seeking assistance with asylum claims.
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Original: 600px|Location of remote island of Nauru, where Australia is sending 8 Burmese refugeesEight Burmese boatpeople , who arrived off Western Australia's Ashmore Reef last week, say they wish to claim refugee status.
Revised: 600px|Location of remote island of Nauru, where Australia is sending 8 Burmese refugees Eight Burmese boat people , who arrived off Western Australia's Ashmore Reef last week, say they wish to claim refugee status.
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Original: Rising demand for irrigation to produce food and biofuels will aggravate scarcities of water but the world's supply is not running out, an international report says today.
Revised: Rising demand for irrigation to produce food and biofuels will aggravate scarcities of water .
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Original:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," the International Water Management Institute (IWMI) says in a report compiled by 700 experts and backed by the UN and farm research groups.
Revised:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," the says in a report compiled by 700 experts and backed by the UN and farm research groups.
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Original:  Food, biofuels could worsen water shortages-report SOLUTIONS%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Solutions included helping poor countries in Africa and Asia to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures in a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
Revised:  SOLUTIONS%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Solutions included helping poor countries in Africa and Asia to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures in a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
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Original:  Food, biofuels could worsen water shortages-report SOLUTIONS%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Solutions included helping poor countries in Africa and Asia to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures in a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
Revised:  Food, biofuels could worsen water shortages-report %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Solutions included helping poor countries in Africa and Asia to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures in a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
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Original:  Food, biofuels could worsen water shortages-report SOLUTIONS%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Solutions included helping poor countries in Africa and Asia to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures in a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
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Original:  " We will have to change business as usual in order to deal with growing scarcity," said Frank Rijsberman, director general of the IWMI, of the report released at a "World Water Week" conference in Stockholm.
Revised:  " One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," said Frank Rijsberman, director general of the IWMI, of the report released at a "World Water Week" conference in Stockholm.
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Original:  " We will have to change business as usual in order to deal with growing scarcity," said Frank Rijsberman, director general of the IWMI, of the report released at a "World Water Week" conference in Stockholm.
Revised:  " We will have to change business as usual in order to deal with growing scarcity," 
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Original:  Another billion lived in regions where water was available in rivers and aquifers but where people lacked infrastructure to exploit it,such as in large tracts or sub-Saharan Africa or northern India.
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Original:  Better irrigation, rainwater harvesting from roofs or use of simple water pumps, operated manually, could help in Africa.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Another way to cut poverty was to raise the value of farm production once basic food needs were met.
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Original:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," the says in a report compiled by 700 experts and backed by the UN and farm research groups.
Revised:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," states the report compiled by 700 experts and backed by the UN and farm research groups.
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Original:  The scarcity figures were higher than previous estimates.
Revised:  Record oil prices and concerns for about climate change are driving more countries to produce biofuels - from sugarcane, corn or wood - as an alternative to fossil fuel.
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Original:  Irrigation absorbs about 74 percent of all water used by people against 18 percent for hydropower and other industrial uses and just 8 percent for households  - was likely to surge by 2050.
Revised:  Irrigation absorbs about 74 percent of all water used by people against 18 percent for hydropower and other industrial uses and just 8 percent for households - such as North Africa, northern China or parts of the southwestern United States.
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Original:  Record oil pricesand concerns for about climate change are driving more countries to produce biofuels      - from sugarcane, corn or wood - as an alternative to fossil fuel     
Revised:  Record oil pricesand concerns for about climate change are driving more countries to produce biofuels - from sugarcane, corn or wood - as an alternative to fossil fuel There is, in fact, enough land, water and human capacity to produce enough food for a growing population over the next 50 years, “so in this sense the world is not ‘running out of water’,” he added. One of the challenges is to provide enough water for agriculture without damaging the environment. “Agriculture is driving water scarcity and water scarcity is driving environmental degradation and destruction,” he said
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Original:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," states the report compiled by 700 experts and backed by the UN and farm research groups.
Revised:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," states the report compiled by 700 experts and backed by the United Nations and farm research groups.
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Original:  This leads us to a picture of a lot more water use," David Molden, who led the study at the Sri Lanka-based IWMI , told Reuters . Solutions included helping poor countries in Africa and Asia to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures in a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
Revised:  This leads us to a picture of a lot more water use," David Molden, who led the study at the Sri Lanka-based IWMI . Solutions included helping poor countries in Africa and Asia to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures in a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
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Original:  This leads us to a picture of a lot more water use," David Molden, who led the study at the Sri Lanka-based IWMI , told Reuters . Solutions included helping poor countries in Africa and Asia to grow more food with available fresh water via simple, low-cost measures in a shift from past policies that favoured expensive dams or canals, the report said.
Revised:  This leads us to a picture of a lot more water use," David Molden, who led the study at the Sri Lanka-based IWMI , told Reuters . 
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Original:  and those in countries lacking the technical and financial resources to capture water, although it may be abundant .
Revised:  and those in countries lacking the technical and financial resources to capture water, despite the its abundance .
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Original:  The problem with water is linked much more to usage that to availability, he noted, with shortages caused “ 98 per cent (by) human reasons and two per cent natural reasons.
Revised:  The problem with water is linked much more to usage that to availability, he noted, with shortages caused " 98 per cent (by) human reasons and two per cent natural reasons.
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Original:  ” Another billion lived in regions where water was available in rivers and aquifers but where people lacked infrastructure to exploit it, such as in large tracts or sub-Saharan Africa or northern India.
Revised:  " Another billion lived in regions where water was available in rivers and aquifers but where people lacked infrastructure to exploit it, such as in large tracts or sub-Saharan Africa or northern India.
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Original:  ” Another billion lived in regions where water was available in rivers and aquifers but where people lacked infrastructure to exploit it, such as in large tracts or sub-Saharan Africa or northern India.
Revised:  ” Another billion lived in regions where water was available in rivers and aquifers but where people lacked infrastructure to exploit it, such as Africa or India.
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Original:  Currently, it takes one litre of water to produce one calorie of food, the study says, and producing one kilo of wheat takes 4,000 litres of water, while 10,000 litres are needed for one kilo of meat.
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Original:  “ Government policies and their approach to water are probably the most urgent that need changing in the short term, ” he said.
Revised:  " Government policies and their approach to water are probably the most urgent that need changing in the short term, ” he said.
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Original:  “ Government policies and their approach to water are probably the most urgent that need changing in the short term, ” he said.
Revised:  “ Government policies and their approach to water are probably the most urgent that need changing in the short term, " he said.
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Original:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," states the report compiled by 700 experts and  backed by the United Nations and farm research groups  . Record oil prices and concerns for about climate change are driving more countries to produce biofuels - from sugarcane, corn or wood - as an alternative to fossil fuel.
Revised:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," states the report compiled by 700 experts . backed by the United Nations and farm research groups . Record oil prices and concerns for about climate change are driving more countries to produce biofuels - from sugarcane, corn or wood - as an alternative to fossil fuel.
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Original:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," states the report compiled by 700 experts and  backed by the United Nations and farm research groups  . Record oil prices and concerns for about climate change are driving more countries to produce biofuels - from sugarcane, corn or wood - as an alternative to fossil fuel.
Revised:  "One in three people is enduring one form or another of water scarcity," states the report compiled by 700 experts and backed by the United Nations and farm research groups . Record oil prices and concerns about rapid onset climate change are driving more countries to produce biofuels - from sugarcane, corn or wood - as an alternative to fossil fuel.
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Original:  This leads us to a picture of a lot more water use ,"  David Molden, who led the study at the Sri Lanka-based IWMI. "The big solution is to find ways to grow more food with less water.
Revised:  This leads us to a picture of a lot more water use ," says David Molden, who led the study at the Sri Lanka-based IWMI. "The big solution is to find ways to grow more food with less water.
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Original:  "The number one recommendation... is to look to improve rain-fed systems in sub-Saharan Africa and South Asia."
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Original:  The report says conquering hunger and coping with an estimated 3 billion extra people by 2050 will result in an 80 percent increase in water use for agriculture on rainfed and irrigated lands .
Revised:  The report says conquering hunger and coping with an estimated 3 billion more humans by 2050 will result in an 80 percent increase in water use for agriculture on rainfed and irrigated lands .
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Original:  The report says conquering hunger and coping with an estimated 3 billion extra people by 2050 will result in an 80 percent increase in water use for agriculture on rainfed and irrigated lands .
Revised:  The report says conquering hunger and coping with an estimated 3 billion extra people by 2050 will result in an 80 percent increase in water use for agriculture .
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Original:  Irrigation absorbs around 74 percent and was likely to surge by 2050.
Revised:  Irrigation absorbs around 74 percent and is likely to surge by 2050.
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Original:  and those in countries lacking the technical and financial resources to capture water , despite the its abundance.
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Original:  The problem with water is linked much more to usage that to availability, he noted, with shortages caused "98 per cent (by) human reasons and two per cent natural reasons . "  The report said that about 1.5 billion of the world's 6.1 billion population lived in areas where water was scarce - such as North Africa, northern China or parts of the southwestern United States.
Revised:  The problem with water is linked much more to usage that to availability, he noted, with shortages caused "98 per cent (by) human reasons and two per cent natural reasons . " 
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