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Original:  The shooters brother, Dr. Hassan Sahebi, said  "My brother was a little depressed recently, but he had served with Afghanistan's national army for 20 years , He loved his country and his people. ..
Revised:  The shooters brother, Dr. Hassan Sahebi, said "My brother was a little depressed recently, but he had served with Afghanistan's national army for 20 years , He loved his country and his people. 
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Original:  The incident is the seventh so far this year in which NATO or Afghan forces have been killed by rogue Afghan  troops
Revised:  The incident is the seventh this year in which NATO or Afghan forces have been killed by rogue Afghan troops
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Original: At Wednesday's meeting, it was decided that the Fed would maintain near-zero interest rates to stimulate the economy, although it acknowledged concerns about rising inflation .
Revised: At Wednesday's meeting, it was decided that the Fed would maintain near-zero interest rates to stimulate the economy, although it acknowledged concerns about rising .
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Original:  It announced that it plans to end its program of buying back by the end of June, a program receiving criticism from s concerned about the budget deficit .
Revised:  It announced that it plans to end its program of buying back by the end of June, a program receiving criticism from s concerned about the .
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Original:  Bernanke’s exchange with reporters, called "historic" by the Los Angeles Times, was the first of  regular news conferences planned to be held quarterly by Bernanke to provide the Fed with more transparency.
Revised:  Bernanke’s exchange with reporters, called "historic" by the Los Angeles Times, was the first of a series of regular news conferences planned to be held quarterly by Bernanke to provide the Fed with more transparency.
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Original:  Bernanke’s exchange with reporters, called "historic" by the Los Angeles Times, was the first of  regular news conferences planned to be held quarterly by Bernanke to provide the Fed with more transparency.
Revised:  Bernanke’s exchange with reporters, called "historic" by the Los Angeles Times, was the first of regular news conferences planned to be held quarterly by Bernanke to provided the Fed with more transparency.
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Original: 200px|A meeting of the Federal Open Market Committee On Wednesday, at the first  public news conference ever given by the (Fed), Federal Reserve Chairman explained the strategy to a small group of reporters and answered some questions.
Revised: 200px|A meeting of the Federal Open Market Committee On Wednesday, at the first public news conference ever given by the (Fed), Federal Reserve Chairman explained the recent policy to a small group of reporters and answered some questions.
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Original:   Unlike the US, the central banks in Europe, Japan and Canada have regularly meet with the press after making such policy decisions.
Revised:  Unlike the US, the central banks in Europe, Japan , Canada and other countries have regularly meet with the press after making such policy decisions.
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Original:  At Wednesday's meeting, it was decided that the Fed would maintain near-zero interest rates to stimulate the economy , although it acknowledged concerns about rising .
Revised:  At Wednesday's meeting, it was decided that the Fed would maintain near-zero interest rates to stimulate the economy .
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Original:  He said the Fed is attempting to revive the US economy by creating jobs and keeping inflation lowwhile remaining mindful of the massive federal deficit . Diane Swonk, chief economist at Mesirow Financial, said of  the press conference, "He was well-prepared and did exactly what he wanted to do - do no harm.
Revised:  He said the Fed is attempting to revive the US economy by creating jobs and keeping low . Diane Swonk, chief economist at Mesirow Financial, said of the press conference, "He was well-prepared and did exactly what he wanted to do - do no harm.
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Original:  He said the Fed is attempting to revive the US economy by creating jobs and keeping inflation lowwhile remaining mindful of the massive federal deficit . Diane Swonk, chief economist at Mesirow Financial, said of  the press conference, "He was well-prepared and did exactly what he wanted to do - do no harm.
Revised:  He said the Fed is attempting to revive the US economy by creating jobs and keeping inflation lowwhile remaining mindful of the massive federal deficit . Diane Swonk, chief economist at Mesirow Financial, said of Bernanke's performance at the press conference, "He was well-prepared and did exactly what he wanted to do - do no harm.
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Original: "Unfortunately, the reason we use this vaguer terminology is we don’t know with certainty how quickly response will be required," he said.
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Original: Apple  CEO Steve Jobs has stepped into the spotlight again breaking the company’s silence surrounding accusations that IPhone technology is being used to monitor the location of its customers.
Revised: Apple Inc. CEO Steve Jobs has stepped into the spotlight again breaking the company’s silence surrounding accusations that IPhone technology is being used to monitor the location of its customers.
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Original: Apple  CEO Steve Jobs has stepped into the spotlight again breaking the company’s silence surrounding accusations that IPhone technology is being used to monitor the location of its customers.
Revised: Apple CEO Steve Jobs has stepped into the spotlight again breaking the company’s silence surrounding accusations that technology is being used to monitor the location of its customers.
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Original:  In a recent interview with allthingsd.com, Jobs denied that Apple's location data is being used to track the movements of IPhone users.
Revised:  In a recent interview with allthingsd.com, Jobs denied that Apple's location data is being used to track the movements of iPhone users.
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Original:  Jobs acknowledged that while IPhones keep a database of Wi-Fi and cell tower hotspots these do not reveal anything about individual users' location.
Revised:  Jobs acknowledged that while iPhones keep a database of Wi-Fi and cell tower hotspots these do not reveal anything about individual users' location.
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Original:  Jobs acknowledged that while IPhones keep a database of Wi-Fi and cell tower hotspots these do not reveal anything about individual users' location.
Revised:  Jobs acknowledged that while IPhones keep a database of and cell tower hotspots these do not reveal anything about individual users' location.
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Original:  “That’s what people saw on the phone and mistook it for location” Jobs confirmed during the interview that Apple would testify before the US congress.
Revised:  “That’s what people saw on the phone and mistook it for location” Jobs confirmed during the interview that Apple would testify before the United States congress.
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Original:  “They have asked us to come and we will honour their request, of course  ” The data scandal, coined ‘Location-gate’ has overshadowed news of Apple’s announcement for sales of the delayed white IPhone 4 which will begin shipping from Thursday
Revised:  “They have asked us to come and we will honour their request, of course . ” The data scandal, coined ‘Location-gate’ has overshadowed news of Apple’s announcement for sales of the delayed white IPhone 4 which will begin shipping from Thursday
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Original:  “They have asked us to come and we will honour their request, of course  ” The data scandal, coined ‘Location-gate’ has overshadowed news of Apple’s announcement for sales of the delayed white IPhone 4 which will begin shipping from Thursday
Revised:  “They have asked us to come and we will honour their request, of course ” The data scandal, coined ‘Location-gate’ has overshadowed news of Apple’s announcement for sales of the delayed white which will begin shipping from Thursday
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Original:  In a recent interview with allthingsd.com, Jobs denied that Apple's location data is being used to track the movements of iPhone users.
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Original:  ]] Egyptian politician Mohammed El Baradei has announced that ousted President Hosni Mubarak must stand trial.
Revised:  ]] Egyptian politician Mohamed ElBaradei has announced that ousted President Hosni Mubarak must stand trial.
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Original:  If El Baradei assumes power in the coming October/November 2011 elections, Mubarak and other former high-ranking corrupt Egyptian officials could potentially be tried in The Hague.
Revised:  If ElBaradei assumes power in the coming October/November 2011 elections, Mubarak and other former high-ranking corrupt Egyptian officials could potentially be tried in The Hague.
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Original:  In an interview with the Islam Times, El Baradei cited reasons as to why the trial of Hosni Mubarak will be necessary to undertake if he chooses to run for Egypt's top job.
Revised:  In an interview with the Islam Times, ElBaradei cited reasons as to why the trial of Hosni Mubarak will be necessary to undertake if he chooses to run for Egypt's top job.
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Original:  El Baradei 's previous statement to during the 2011 Egyptian Revolution which began on the 25th of January, according to , was that a trial was unnecessary and that what primarily needed to be done was for Mubarak to hand back money, speculated to be as much as $70 billion, which Mubarak illegally took over the course of his 30 year reign and now owes to the Egyptian people in order for economic progress to emerge.
Revised:  ElBaradei 's previous statement to during the 2011 Egyptian Revolution which began on the 25th of January, according to , was that a trial was unnecessary and that what primarily needed to be done was for Mubarak to hand back money, speculated to be as much as $70 billion, which Mubarak illegally took over the course of his 30 year reign and now owes to the Egyptian people in order for economic progress to emerge.
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Original:  El Baradei has stated he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral program for ElBaradei".
Revised:  ElBaradei has stated he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral program for ElBaradei".
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Original:  El Baradei is the recipient of a 2005 for his work with the (IAEA) in the advocacy of nuclear energy
Revised:  ElBaradei is the recipient of a 2005 for his work with the (IAEA) in the advocacy of nuclear energy
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Original:  ]] Egyptian politician Mohamed ElBaradei has announced that ousted President Hosni Mubarak must stand trial.
Revised:  ]] Egyptian politician Mohamed ElBaradei said that ousted President Hosni Mubarak must stand trial.
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Original:  The announcement follows the recent ratification by Egyptian Foreign Minister of a statute that ensures Egypt will join the jurisdiction of the (ICC).
Revised:  His statement follows the recent ratification by Egyptian Foreign Minister of a statute that ensures Egypt will join the jurisdiction of the (ICC).
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Original: ElBaradei's previous statement to during the 2011 Egyptian Revolution which began on the 25th of January, according to , was that a trial was unnecessary and that what primarily needed to be done was for Mubarak to hand back money, speculated to be as much as $70 billion, which Mubarak  illegally took over the course of his 30 year reign and now owes to the Egyptian people in order for economic progress to emerge.
Revised: ElBaradei's previous statement to during the 2011 Egyptian Revolution which began on the 25th of January, according to was that a trial was unnecessary and that what primarily needed to be done was for Mubarak to hand back money, speculated to be as much as $70 billion, which Mubarak illegally took over the course of his 30 year reign and now owes to the Egyptian people in order for economic progress to emerge.
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Original: ElBaradei's previous statement to during the 2011 Egyptian Revolution which began on the 25th of January, according to , was that a trial was unnecessary and that what primarily needed to be done was for Mubarak to hand back money, speculated to be as much as $70 billion, which Mubarak  illegally took over the course of his 30 year reign and now owes to the Egyptian people in order for economic progress to emerge.
Revised: ElBaradei's previous statement to during the 2011 Egyptian Revolution which began on the 25th of January, according to , was that a trial was unnecessary and that what primarily needed to be done was for Mubarak to hand back money, speculated to be as much as $70 billion, which Mubarak was said to have illegally took over the course of his 30 year reign and now owes to the Egyptian people in order for economic progress to emerge.
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Original: ElBaradei's previous statement to during the 2011 Egyptian Revolution which began on the 25th of January, according to , was that a trial was unnecessary and that what primarily needed to be done was for Mubarak to hand back money, speculated to be as much as $70 billion, which Mubarak  illegally took over the course of his 30 year reign and now owes to the Egyptian people in order for economic progress to emerge.
Revised: ElBaradei's previous statement to during the 2011 Egyptian Revolution which began on the 25th of January, according to , was that a trial was unnecessary and that what primarily needed to be done was for Mubarak to hand back money, speculated to be as much as $70 billion, which Mubarak illegally took over the course of his 30 year reign and now owes back to the "Egyptian people" in order for economic progress to emerge.
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Original:  ElBaradei has stated he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral program for ElBaradei"
Revised:  ElBaradei stated that he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral program for ElBaradei"
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Original:  ElBaradei has stated he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral program for ElBaradei"
Revised:  ElBaradei has stated he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral programme for ElBaradei.
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Original:  ElBaradei stated that he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral programme for ElBaradei.
Revised:  ElBaradei has stated he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral programme for ElBaradei.
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Original:  ElBaradei stated that he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral programme for ElBaradei.
Revised:  ElBaradei stated that he believes Egypt should be run by 'institutions' rather than 'individuals' and has said, "I want to come up with a renaissance project for Egypt and not an electoral program for ElBaradei"
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Original: Officials did not want to give specific numbers for death toll and destruction in specific states, as the extend of the damage and human injury and death is not completely known.
Revised: Officials did not want to give specific numbers for death toll and destruction in specific states, as the extent of the damage and human injury and death is not completely known.
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Original: "I don't know how anyone survived," said Mayor Walter Maddox of Tuscloosa .
Revised: "I don't know how anyone survived," said Mayor Walter Maddox of Tuscaloosa .
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Original:  It was incredibly intimate and moving.   
Revised:  It was incredibly intimate and moving. " 
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Original:  Thanks for all those who joined the debate on our comments page , it looks like the debate over monarchic societies may continue for a while yet.
Revised:  Thanks to all those who joined the debate on our comments page , it looks like the debate over monarchic societies may continue for a while yet.
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Original:  Thanks for all those who joined the debate on our comments page , it looks like the debate over monarchic societies may continue for a while yet.
Revised:  Thanks for all those who joined the debate on our comments page ; it looks like the debate over monarchic societies may continue for a while yet.
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Original: File:William and Kate thumbnail.jpg| and , who will be married today in London.
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Original: Marcinkiewicz believe that his goverment will stop corruption and will help getting out of unemployment problem in Poland.
Revised: Marcinkiewicz believes that his goverment will stop corruption and will help getting out of unemployment problem in Poland.
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Original:  The proposal was ultimately rejected by the House of Commons .
Revised:  Although the proposal was rejected by the House of Commons .
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Original:  The proposal was ultimately rejected by the House of Commons .
Revised:  The proposal was ultimately rejected by the House of Commons 
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Original:  The police lobbying has provoked criticism from seniors members of the opposition Conservative Party, who are pushing for an inquiry into the behaviour of government ministers towards the police and for 'embroiling them in politics'.
Revised:  , the lobbying has provoked criticism from seniors members of the opposition Conservative Party, who are pushing for an inquiry into the behaviour of government ministers towards the police and for 'embroiling them in politics'.
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Original:  The police lobbying has provoked criticism from seniors members of the opposition Conservative Party, who are pushing for an inquiry into the behaviour of government ministers towards the police and for 'embroiling them in politics'.
Revised:  The police lobbying has provoked criticism from senior members of the opposition Conservative Party, who are pushing for an inquiry into the behaviour of government ministers towards the police and for 'embroiling them in politics'.
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Original: British Prime Minister Tony Blair could face a House of Commons inquiry into claims that chief police officers were pressurised to support a political agenda during Wednesday's vote to extend detention without charge.
Revised: British Prime Minister Tony Blair could face a House of Commons inquiry into claims that chief police officers were pressured to support a political agenda during Wednesday's vote to extend detention without charge.
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Original:  Home Office minister Hazel Blears denied the claims: "It is entirely proper that the police were there to make their case and for Parliament to considered it."
Revised:  Home Office minister Hazel Blears denied the claims: "It is entirely proper that the police were there to make their case and for Parliament to consider it."
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Original:  The merchant ship was en-route from Brazil to Yemen with a cargo of sugar and is the fourth ship to be attacked in the space of a week.
Revised:  The merchant ship was en-route from Brazil to Yemen with a cargo of sugar . It is the fourth ship to be attacked in the space of a week.
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Original:  At the weekend a U.S.-owned cruise ship was attacked with rocket propelled grenades.
Revised:  Last weekend, a U.S.-owned cruise ship was attacked with rocket propelled grenades.
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Original: The Somalian government called for help from the international community to  stem the wave of recent seafaring pirate attacks off the coast on Saturday .
Revised: The Somalian government called on Saturday for the international community to stem the wave of recent seafaring pirate attacks off the coast on Saturday .
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Original: The Somalian government called for help from the international community to  stem the wave of recent seafaring pirate attacks off the coast on Saturday .
Revised: The Somalian government called for help from the international community to help stem the wave of recent seafaring pirate attacks off the coast on Saturday .
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Original:  A letter to Somalia from the United Nations security council admonished the government which has largely disintegrated into fiefdoms since Siad Barre was ousted in 1991.
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Original:  The London-based International Maritime Bureau (IMB) reported  that a Thai merchant vessel and its crew of 26 have been hijacked by pirates off the coast of Somalia yesterday.
Revised:  The London-based International Maritime Bureau (IMB) reported yesterday that a Thai merchant vessel and its crew of 26 have been hijacked by pirates off the coast of Somalia yesterday.
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Original:  The London-based International Maritime Bureau (IMB) reported  that a Thai merchant vessel and its crew of 26 have been hijacked by pirates off the coast of Somalia yesterday.
Revised:  The London-based International Maritime Bureau (IMB) reported that a Thai merchant vessel and its crew of 26 have been hijacked by Somalian pirates off their coastline.
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Original:  According to the IMB, there have been 23 other pirating atttcks in coastal waters off the east African nation since March 15.
Revised:  According to the IMB, there have been 23 other pirating attacks in coastal waters off the east African nation since March 15.
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Original: Sir Paul McCartney is scheduled, on Saturday, November 12, to perform the first concert which will be brodcast live into space.
Revised: Sir Paul McCartney is scheduled, on Saturday, November 12, to perform the first concert which will be broadcast live into space.
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Original: The idea for the show originally came from a report McCartney received about "Good Day Sunshine" being used to wake astronauts aboard the space shutte Discovery as it prepared to land in August.
Revised: The idea for the show originally came from a report McCartney received about "Good Day Sunshine" being used to wake astronauts aboard the space shuttle Discovery as it prepared to land in August.
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Original: 180px|International Space Station Sir Paul McCartney is scheduled , on Saturday, November 12, to perform the first concert which will be broadcast live into space.
Revised: 180px|International Space Station Sir Paul McCartney is scheduled on Saturday, November 12, to perform the first concert which will be broadcast live into space.
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Original: Jemaa el-Fnaa square, location of the café Marrakech on the map of Morroco .
Revised: Jemaa el-Fnaa square, location of the café 
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Original:  At least sixteen people have been reported killed by an alleged terrorist bombing in the city of .
Revised:  At least sixteen people are reported killed in an apparent terrorist bombing in the city of .
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Original:  The bombing occurred in  busy Argana café before lunch time on Thursday28th of April .
Revised:  The bombing occurred in the busy Argana café before lunch time on Thursday28th of April .
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