wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Mr. Bashir is said to have personally directed a mlitary campaign "to destroy in substantial part the Fur, Masalit and Zaghawa" tribes. have asked the ICC for a warrant to arrest al-Bashir for 10 counts including war crimes, crimes against humanity and genocide.
Revised:  Mr. Bashir is said to have personally directed a mlitary campaign "to destroy in substantial part the Fur, Masalit and Zaghawa" tribes. have asked the ICC for a warrant to arrest al-Bashir for 10 offences including war crimes, crimes against humanity and genocide.
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Original:  Al-Bashir came to rule power in 1989 and has led the country into a racial conflict that dates back to 2003.
Revised:  Al-Bashir came to rule power in 1989. There has been a racial conflict that dates back to 2003.
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Original:  Al-Bashir came to rule power in 1989 and has led the country into a racial conflict that dates back to 2003.
Revised:  Al-Bashir came to rule power in 1989 and has led the country into a racial conflict in the country since 2003.
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Original:  The Arab militia, named the Janjaweed, are a government funded group that have been driving the conflict in the region.
Revised:  The Arab militia, named the Janjaweed, are a government funded group alledged to have been driving the conflict in the region.
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Original:  Al-Bashir has rejected the charges, claiming the ICC has no authority to arrest him as Sudan is not a member of the court  The UN will evacuate all non-essential peacekeepers in the region however they maintain that they will continue their operation despite the deteriorating security situatio
Revised:  Al-Bashir has rejected the charges, claiming the ICC has no authority to arrest him as Sudan is not a member of the court . The UN will evacuate all non-essential peacekeepers in the region however they maintain that they will continue their operation despite the deteriorating security situatio
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Original:  Al-Bashir has rejected the charges, claiming the ICC has no authority to arrest him as Sudan is not a member of the court  The UN will evacuate all non-essential peacekeepers in the region however they maintain that they will continue their operation despite the deteriorating security situatio
Revised:  Al-Bashir has rejected the charges, claiming the ICC has no authority to arrest him as Sudan is not a member of the court The United Nations will evacuate all non-essential peacekeepers in the region however they maintain that they will continue their operation despite the deteriorating security situatio
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Original:  Al-Bashir has rejected the charges, claiming the ICC has no authority to arrest him as Sudan is not a member of the court  The UN will evacuate all non-essential peacekeepers in the region however they maintain that they will continue their operation despite the deteriorating security situatio
Revised:  Al-Bashir has rejected the charges, claiming the ICC has no authority to arrest him as Sudan is not a member of the court The UN will evacuate all non-essential peacekeepers in the region however they maintain that they will continue their operation despite the deteriorating security situation
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Original:  The International Criminal Court's  Procecutor Luis Moreno-Ocampohas accused Sudanese President Omar Hassan al-Bashir of major crimes committed in the Darfur region.
Revised:  The International Criminal Court's (ICC) Procecutor Luis Moreno-Ocampohas accused Sudanese President Omar Hassan al-Bashir of major crimes committed in the Darfur region.
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Original: Barack Obama Controversy surrounds  the cover on the latest issue of The New Yorker magazine which comically portrayed United States Presidential contender Barack Obama and his wife  as terrorists.
Revised: Barack Obama Controversy surrounds the latest issue of The New Yorker magazine which comically portrayed United States Presidential contender Barack Obama and his wife as terrorists.
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Original: Barack Obama Controversy surrounds  the cover on the latest issue of The New Yorker magazine which comically portrayed United States Presidential contender Barack Obama and his wife  as terrorists.
Revised: Barack Obama Controversy surrounds the cover on the latest issue of The New Yorker magazine , which portrays United States Presidential contender Barack Obama and his wife as terrorists.
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Original: Barack Obama Controversy surrounds  the cover on the latest issue of The New Yorker magazine which comically portrayed United States Presidential contender Barack Obama and his wife  as terrorists.
Revised: Barack Obama Controversy surrounds the cover on the latest issue of The New Yorker magazine which comically portrayed United States Presidential contender Barack Obama and his wife Michelle as terrorists.
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Original:  The publication continued   to defend its position that the cover was a work of satire
Revised:  The publication continued The publication continues to defend its position that the cover was a work of satire
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Original:  The publication continued   to defend its position that the cover was a work of satire
Revised:  The publication continued to defend its position that the cover is a work of satire
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Original:  The New Yorker  indicated that Barry Blitt's cartoon was intended to lampoon "the use of scare tactics and misinformation in the Presidential election to derail Barack Obama’s campaign."
Revised:  The New Yorker '' indicated that Barry Blitt's cartoon was intended to lampoon "the use of scare tactics and misinformation in the Presidential election to derail Barack Obama’s campaign."
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Original:  The two are in the Oval Office giving each other a fist bump, a greeting which one Fox News  commentator has previously called a "terrorist fist jab", while an American flag burns in the fireplace in the background.
Revised:  The two are in the Oval Office giving each other a fist bump, a greeting which one Fox News Channel commentator has previously called a "terrorist fist jab", while an American flag burns in the fireplace in the background.
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Original:  This Centrino 2 continued features on earlier-released 45 nanometer (45nm) "Penryn" processor, and added enhanced security and management features to the Vpro version.
Revised:  This Centrino 2 continues support for features on the earlier-released 45 nanometer (45nm) "Penryn" processor, and added enhanced security and management features to the Vpro version.
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Original:  This Centrino 2 continued features on earlier-released 45 nanometer (45nm) "Penryn" processor, and added enhanced security and management features to the Vpro version.
Revised:  This Centrino 2 continued features on earlier-released 45 nanometer (45nm) "Penryn" processor, and implements enhanced security and management features to the Vpro version.
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Original:  "HD-to-Go" for mobile entertainment and "802.11n" for wireless networking were embed into this new processor technology.
Revised:  "HD-to-Go" for mobile entertainment and "802.11n" for wireless networking were embedded into this new processor technology.
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Original:  Due to the difference on networking infrastructure in several nations, the WiMAX feature will be joined priory in Europe and North America before this December.
Revised:  Due to the difference on networking infrastructure in several nations, the WiMAX feature will be added in Europe and North America before this December.
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Original:  The bus had 35 passengers travelling from Kyaukkyi, and was near Daik Oo, some 85 miles from its destination  
Revised:  The bus had 35 passengers travelling from Kyaukkyi, and was near Daik Oo, some 85 miles from its destination . 
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Original: A bomb explosion on a bus in Myanmar (alternatively Burma) as killed a 55-year-old man, and left another man wounded.
Revised: A bomb explosion on a bus in Myanmar (alternatively Burma) has killed a 55-year-old man, and left another man wounded.
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Original: The deceased was identified as only as Khant by the official New Light of Myanmar.
Revised: The deceased was identified only as Khant by the official New Light of Myanmar.
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Original:  The bus had 35 passengers travelling from Kyaukkyi, and was near Daik Oo, some 85 miles from its destination.
Revised:  The bus had 35 passengers traveling from Kyaukkyi, and was near Daik Oo, some 85 miles from its destination.
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Original: A bomb explosion on a bus in Myanmar (alternatively Burma) has killed a 55-year-old man , and left another man wounded.
Revised: A bomb explosion on a bus in Myanmar (alternatively Burma) has killed a 55-year-old man and left another man wounded.
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Original:  The explosion occured at 8:50 am  (0220 GMT) yesterday as the bus travelled to Yangon, but state media has only posted news of the attack today.
Revised:  The explosion occurred yesterday at 8:50 am (0220 GMT) yesterday as the bus travelled to Yangon, but state media has only posted news of the attack today.
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Original:  The explosion occured at 8:50 am  (0220 GMT) yesterday as the bus travelled to Yangon, but state media has only posted news of the attack today.
Revised:  The explosion occured at 8:50 am (0220 GMT) as the bus travelled to Yangon, but state media has only posted news of the attack today.
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Original:  The explosion occured at 8:50 am  (0220 GMT) yesterday as the bus travelled to Yangon, but state media has only posted news of the attack today.
Revised:  The explosion occured at 8:50 am (0220 GMT) yesterday as the bus traveled to Yangon, but state media has only posted news of the attack today.
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Original:  The deceased was identified only as Khant by the official New Light of Myanmar .
Revised:  The deceased was identified only as Khant by the New Light of Myanmar .
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Original: They had been attending a graduation ceremony for young people who had competed training before begining one year's military service.
Revised: The victims had been attending a graduation ceremony for young people who had competed training before begining one year's military service.
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Original: They had been attending a graduation ceremony for young people who had competed training before begining one year's military service.
Revised: They had been attending a graduation ceremony for young people who had completed training before beginning one year's military service.
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Original:  The victims had been attempting to enter the stadium when the disaster occured .
Revised:  The victims had been attempting to enter the stadium when the disaster occurred .
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Original:  According to a police statement “The majority of them [the victims] are women and children.
Revised:  According to a police statement , "the majority of them [the victims] are women and children.
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Original:  ” Khartoum's stadium is actually in the capital's twin city Omdurman.
Revised:  " Khartoum's stadium is actually in the capital's twin city Omdurman.
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Original:  The bodies have already been taken to the local morgue
Revised:  Bodies of the deceased have already been taken to the local morgue
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Original:  ]  This is the thirty-fifth orbital launch of 2008.
Revised:  expected lifetime] This is the thirty-fifth orbital launch of 2008.
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Original:  It is also the fourth Sea Launch mission of the year, and the fifth Zenit launch.
Revised:  It is also the fourth Sea Launch mission of the year, and the fourth Zenit launch.
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Original:  It is also the third Sea Launch mission of the year, and the fourth Zenit launch.
Revised:  It is also the fourth Sea Launch mission of the year, and the fourth Zenit launch.
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Original:  It has not been reported by Cuban media if anyone else was in the car, or if other vehicles were involved, but it is known his wife, 2004 world scratch cycling champion Yoanka Gonzalez, was not present   
Revised:  It has not been reported by Cuban media if anyone else was in the car, or if other vehicles were involved, but it is known his wife, 2004 world scratch cycling champion Yoanka Gonzalez, was not present . 
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Original:  Our shared vision of providing a high-quality and affordable convenience offer to local communities means that together we will be twice as strong, and therefore twice as able to deliver the local grocery shops British customers demand," he said   
Revised:  Our shared vision of providing a high-quality and affordable convenience offer to local communities means that together we will be twice as strong, and therefore twice as able to deliver the local grocery shops British customers demand," he said . 
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Original:  The Co-operative Group (Co-op) and Bristol based Somerfield today agreed  a deal worth GBP 1.565 billion which results in Somerfield being aquired by Co-op.
Revised:  The Co-operative Group (Co-op) and Bristol-based Somerfield today agreed a deal worth GBP 1.565 billion which results in Somerfield being aquired by Co-op.
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Original:  The Co-operative Group (Co-op) and Bristol based Somerfield today agreed  a deal worth GBP 1.565 billion which results in Somerfield being aquired by Co-op.
Revised:  The Co-operative Group (Co-op) and Bristol based Somerfield today agreed on a deal worth GBP 1.565 billion which results in Somerfield being aquired by Co-op.
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Original:  The Co-operative Group (Co-op) and Bristol based Somerfield today agreed  a deal worth GBP 1.565 billion which results in Somerfield being aquired by Co-op.
Revised:  The Co-operative Group (Co-op) and Bristol based Somerfield today agreed a deal worth £ 1.565 billion which results in Somerfield being aquired by Co-op.
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Original:  Co-op have said that the acquisition took place on a "cash-free debt-free basis."
Revised:  Co-op has said that the acquisition took place on a "cash-free debt-free basis."
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Original:  Peter Marks, Chief Executive of The Co-operative Group, claimed that "this is good news for consumers and for competition in the grocery market, where we will create a stronger fifth player in food and a convenience store chain with unrivalled geographic reach."
Revised:  Peter Marks, chief executive of The Co-operative Group, claimed that "this is good news for consumers and for competition in the grocery market, where we will create a stronger fifth player in food and a convenience store chain with unrivalled geographic reach."
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Original:  " With 4.4\%  of the market share , the Co-op is the fifth largest grocery chain in the UK.
Revised:  " With 4.4\% share of the market share , the Co-op is the fifth largest grocery chain in the UK.
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Original:  " With 4.4\%  of the market share , the Co-op is the fifth largest grocery chain in the UK.
Revised:  " With 4.4\% of the market , the Co-op is the fifth largest grocery chain in the UK.
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Original:  Somerfield is the seventh largest with  3.7\%  . The owners of Somerfield made their wish to sell the company clear in January of this year.
Revised:  Somerfield is the seventh largest with a 3.7\% . The owners of Somerfield made their wish to sell the company clear in January of this year.
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Original:  Somerfield is the seventh largest with  3.7\%  . The owners of Somerfield made their wish to sell the company clear in January of this year.
Revised:  Somerfield is the seventh largest with 3.7\% share . The owners of Somerfield made their wish to sell the company clear in January of this year.
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Original:  BBC News Online has reported that the Competition Commission may force to co-op to sell some stores due to its increased presence
Revised:  BBC News Online reported that the Competition Commission may force to co-op to sell some stores due to its increased presence
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Original:  BBC News Online has reported that the Competition Commission may force to co-op to sell some stores due to its increased presence
Revised:  BBC News Online has reported that the Competition Commission may force Co-op to sell some stores due to its increased presence
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Original: Paul Mason, chair of  Somerfield, also commetned on the takeover.
Revised: Paul Mason, chair of privately-held Somerfield, also commetned on the takeover.
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Original: Paul Mason, chair of  Somerfield, also commetned on the takeover.
Revised: Paul Mason, chair of Somerfield, also commented on the takeover.
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Original: One of the world's most pioneering earthquake warning systems in Japan now confronts some problems for practical use .
Revised: One of the world's pioneering earthquake warning systems in Japan now confronts some problems for practical use .
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Original: One of the world's most pioneering earthquake warning systems in Japan now confronts some problems for practical use .
Revised: One of the world's most pioneering earthquake warning systems in Japan has been found to have some practical use issues .
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Original:  The Japan Meteorological Agency (JMA) apologized for issuing erroneously an "earthquake early warning for advanced users", as to an earthquake which occurred on the Monday night at sea off Ibaraki Prefecture, eastern Japan.
Revised:  The Japan Meteorological Agency (JMA) apologized for erroneously issuing an "earthquake early warning for advanced users", as to an earthquake which occurred on the Monday night at sea off Ibaraki Prefecture, eastern Japan.
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Original:  The Japan Meteorological Agency (JMA) apologized for issuing erroneously an "earthquake early warning for advanced users", as to an earthquake which occurred on the Monday night at sea off Ibaraki Prefecture, eastern Japan.
Revised:  The Japan Meteorological Agency (JMA) apologized for issuing erroneously an "earthquake early warning for advanced users", with regards to an earthquake which occurred on the Monday night at sea off Ibaraki Prefecture, eastern Japan.
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Original:  There was in fact no fear of huge tremors .
Revised:  There was in fact no suspicion that huge tremors would occur .
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Original:  The root cause was a simple human mistake in regulating one seismograph.
Revised:  The root cause was a simple human mistake that happened while operating one seismograph.
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Original:  The trouble also revealed that some receiver devices couldn't handle warnings appropriately under certain conditions.
Revised:  The accidental release of the warning also revealed that some receiver devices couldn't handle warnings appropriately under certain conditions.
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Original:  The trouble also revealed that some receiver devices couldn't handle warnings appropriately under certain conditions.
Revised:  The trouble also revealed that some receiver devices couldn't handle warnings properly under certain conditions.
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Original:  JMA operates a system called "Earthquake Early Warning" (EEW) , which is designed to analyze the seismic waves and issue a warning if large tremors are expected, as immediately as  possible after an earthquake is detected  .
Revised:  JMA operates a system called "Earthquake Early Warning" (EEW) ; it is designed to analyze the seismic waves and issue a warning if large tremors are expected, as immediately as possible after an earthquake is detected .
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Original:  JMA operates a system called "Earthquake Early Warning" (EEW) , which is designed to analyze the seismic waves and issue a warning if large tremors are expected, as immediately as  possible after an earthquake is detected  .
Revised:  JMA operates a system called "Earthquake Early Warning" (EEW) , which is designed to analyze seismic waves and issue a warning if large tremors are expected, as immediately as possible after an earthquake is detected .
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Original:  JMA operates a system called "Earthquake Early Warning" (EEW) , which is designed to analyze the seismic waves and issue a warning if large tremors are expected, as immediately as  possible after an earthquake is detected  .
Revised:  JMA operates a system called "Earthquake Early Warning" (EEW) , which is designed to analyze the seismic waves and issue a warning as possible after an earthquake is detected .
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Original:  JMA operates a system called "Earthquake Early Warning" (EEW) , which is designed to analyze the seismic waves and issue a warning if large tremors are expected, as immediately as  possible after an earthquake is detected  .
Revised:  JMA operates a system called "Earthquake Early Warning" (EEW) , which is designed to analyze the seismic waves and issue a warning if large tremors are expected, as immediately as soon as possible after an earthquake is detected .
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Original:  Its purpose is to minimize possible damage triggered directly by seismic tremors.
Revised:  Its purpose is to minimize the damage caused by seismic tremors.
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Original:  Two EEW schemes were put to practical use in 2006 and 2007.
Revised:  Two EEW schemes were put into practise in 2006 and 2007.
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Original:  Another  EEW scheme for the general public, which is utilized by nationwide broadcasting networks (of NHK, for example), was not involved in the trouble this time .
Revised:  Another EEW scheme for the general public, which is utilized by nationwide broadcasting networks (of NHK, for example), was unaffected by this error .
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Original:  All four subway lines operated by the Tokyo Metropolitan Bureau were suspended in reaction to the first warning with false information , even though it was retracted within 11 seconds.
Revised:  All four subway lines operated by the Tokyo Metropolitan Bureau were suspended in reaction to the first warning , even though it was retracted within 11 seconds.
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Original:  There were receiver devices ( available on the market ) which failed to handle the warning appropriately.
Revised:  There were receiver devices ( available on the market failed to handle the warning appropriately.
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Original:  Some of them , adopted by an information distributer company for its service, misjudged as if the magnitude had been estimated at moment magnitude scale 12.7, while the warning didn't include a datum of it.
Revised:  Some of them misjudged the magnitude pf the quake, displaying an estimate of 12.7 on the moment magnitude scale 12.7, while the warning didn't include a datum of it.
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Original:  One at a junior high school boarding house in Aichi Prefecture alerted as if the seismic intensity might have reached to Scale 6 Lower (the third largest of 10 JMA scales), causing some girl students to cry.
Revised:  One at a junior high school boarding house in Aichi Prefecture displayed an alert as if it were on the Scale 6 Lower (the third largest of 10 JMA scales), causing some girl students to cry.
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Original:  The device didn't tell the fact that the students were far away from the focus.
Revised:  The device didn't say that the students were far away from the focus.
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Original:  Such failures show that recipients of an EEW  for "advanced users" are not always trained well enough to react to it .
Revised:  Such failures show that recipients of an EEW alert for "advanced users" are not always trained well enough to react to it .
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Original:  Such failures show that recipients of an EEW  for "advanced users" are not always trained well enough to react to it .
Revised:  Such failures show that recipients of an EEW for "advanced users" are not always trained well enough to react appropriately .
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