wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  We systematically evaluate our representation and demonstrate that our editing scheme is superior to  2D counterparts .
Revised:  We systematically evaluate our representation and demonstrate that our editing scheme is superior to its 2D counterparts .
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Original:  We systematically evaluate our representation and demonstrate that our editing scheme is superior to  2D counterparts .
Revised:  We systematically evaluate our representation and demonstrate that our editing scheme is superior to 2D counterpart .
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Original:  Previous  representations learned by neural networks are often uninterpretable, limited to a single object, or lacking 3D knowledge.
Revised:  Previous scene representations learned by neural networks are often uninterpretable, limited to a single object, or lacking 3D knowledge.
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Original:  Our scene encoder performs inverse graphics, translating a scene into the structured object representation.
Revised:  Our scene encoder performs inverse graphics, translating a scene into a structured object-wise representation.
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Original:  The disentanglement of geometry, appearance, and pose supports various 3D-aware scene manipulations , e.g., rotating and moving objects freely while maintaining consistent shape and texture, changing object appearance without affecting its shape.
Revised:  The disentanglement of semantics, geometry, and appearance supports 3D-aware scene manipulations , e.g., rotating and moving objects freely while maintaining consistent shape and texture, changing object appearance without affecting its shape.
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Original:  The disentanglement of geometry, appearance, and pose supports various 3D-aware scene manipulations , e.g., rotating and moving objects freely while maintaining consistent shape and texture, changing object appearance without affecting its shape.
Revised:  The disentanglement of geometry, appearance, and pose supports various 3D-aware scene manipulation , e.g., rotating and moving objects freely while maintaining consistent shape and texture, changing object appearance without affecting its shape.
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Original:  The disentanglement of geometry, appearance, and pose supports various 3D-aware scene manipulations , e.g., rotating and moving objects freely while maintaining consistent shape and texture, changing object appearance without affecting its shape.
Revised:  The disentanglement of geometry, appearance, and pose supports various 3D-aware scene manipulations , e.g., rotating and moving objects freely while keeping the consistent shape and texture, changing object appearance without affecting its shape.
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Original:  The disentanglement of geometry, appearance, and pose supports various 3D-aware scene manipulations , e.g., rotating and moving objects freely while maintaining consistent shape and texture, changing object appearance without affecting its shape.
Revised:  The disentanglement of geometry, appearance, and pose supports various 3D-aware scene manipulations , e.g., rotating and moving objects freely while maintaining consistent shape and texture, and changing the object appearance without affecting its shape.
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Original:  We systematically evaluate our model and demonstrate that our editing scheme  is superior to its 2D counterpart.
Revised:  Experiments demonstrate that our editing scheme is superior to its 2D counterpart.
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Original: The exponential growth of information on the Internet has created a big challenge for retrieval systems in terms of yielding relevant results.
Revised: The exponential growth of information on the Internet is a big challenge for retrieval systems in terms of yielding relevant results.
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Original: The exponential growth of information on the Internet has created a big challenge for retrieval systems in terms of yielding relevant results.
Revised: The exponential growth of information on the Internet has created a big challenge for information retrieval systems towards generating relevant results.
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Original:  This challenge requires automatic approaches for reformatting or expanding users' queries to increase recall .
Revised:  Novel approaches are required to reformat or expand user queries to generate a satisfactory response and increase recall and precision .
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Original:  Query expansion (QE) , a technique for broadening users' queries by appending additional tokens or phrases bases on semantic similarity metrics , plays a crucial role in overcoming this challenge.
Revised:  Query expansion (QE) is a technique to broaden users' queries by appending additional tokens or phrases bases on semantic similarity metrics , plays a crucial role in overcoming this challenge.
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Original:  Query expansion (QE) , a technique for broadening users' queries by appending additional tokens or phrases bases on semantic similarity metrics , plays a crucial role in overcoming this challenge.
Revised:  Query expansion (QE) , a technique for broadening users' queries by introducing additional tokens or phrases bases on semantic similarity metrics , plays a crucial role in overcoming this challenge.
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Original:  Query expansion (QE) , a technique for broadening users' queries by appending additional tokens or phrases bases on semantic similarity metrics , plays a crucial role in overcoming this challenge.
Revised:  Query expansion (QE) , a technique for broadening users' queries by appending additional tokens or phrases based on some semantic similarity metrics , plays a crucial role in overcoming this challenge.
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Original:  We implemented  a command line tool , named Xu, and evaluated its performance against a dataset of news articles , concluding that on average, expansions generated using this technique outperform those generated by previous approaches, and the base user query .
Revised:  We implemented a command line tool and evaluated its performance against a dataset of news articles , concluding that on average, expansions generated using this technique outperform those generated by previous approaches, and the base user query .
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Original:  Two workarounds are proposed to fix the issue, both requiring minor changes on the algorithm and incur a slight penalty on the running time of the algorithm.
Revised:  Two workarounds are proposed to fix the issue, both requiring minor changes on the algorithm and incuring a slight penalty on the running time of the algorithm.
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Original:  Two workarounds are proposed to fix the issue, both requiring minor changes on the algorithm and incuring a slight penalty on the running time of the algorithm.
Revised:  Two workarounds are proposed to fix the issue, both requiring minor changes on the algorithm and incurring a slight penalty on the running time of the algorithm.
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Original:  We find that the portfolio trajectory resulting from the hedging strategy, when analysed pathwise , is sensitive to Greeks beyond the leading first-order Delta, and is Gamma-sensitive in particular.
Revised:  We find that the portfolio trajectory resulting from the hedging strategy, when analysed pathwise , is sensitive to Greeks beyond the leading-order Delta, and is Gamma-sensitive in particular.
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Original: We describe the pricing and hedging practices refraining from the use of probability .
Revised: We describe the pricing and hedging of financial options without the use of probability .
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Original:  The main idea of the analysis is to employ a discrete Helmholtz decomposition of the difference between the canonical interpolation and the finite element solution for the first order mixed Raviart-Thomas element and the mixed Hellan-Herrmann-Johnson element, respectively.
Revised:  The main idea of the analysis is to employ a discrete Helmholtz decomposition of the difference between the canonical interpolation and the finite element solution for the first order mixed Raviart--Thomas element and the mixed Hellan-Herrmann-Johnson element, respectively.
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Original:  The main idea of the analysis is to employ a discrete Helmholtz decomposition of the difference between the canonical interpolation and the finite element solution for the first order mixed Raviart-Thomas element and the mixed Hellan-Herrmann-Johnson element, respectively.
Revised:  The main idea of the analysis is to employ a discrete Helmholtz decomposition of the difference between the canonical interpolation and the finite element solution for the first order mixed Raviart-Thomas element and the mixed Hellan--Herrmann--Johnson element, respectively.
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Original:  This in particular allows for proving a full one order superconvergence result for these two mixed finite elements.
Revised:  This , in particular, allows for proving a full one order superconvergence result for these two mixed finite elements.
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Original:  For non-monotone functions, we obtain a 1 /e-\epsilon approximation using O(\log(n/\epsilon)\log( 1/\epsilon)\log(n+ m)/\epsilon^2) rounds of adaptivity and evaluations of the function and its gradient .
Revised:  For non-monotone functions, we obtain a 1-1 /e-\epsilon approximation using O(\log(n/\epsilon)\log( 1/\epsilon)\log(n+ m)/\epsilon^2) rounds of adaptivity and evaluations of the function and its gradient .
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Original:  For non-monotone functions, we obtain a 1 /e-\epsilon approximation using O(\log(n/\epsilon)\log( 1/\epsilon)\log(n+ m)/\epsilon^2) rounds of adaptivity and evaluations of the function and its gradient .
Revised:  For non-monotone functions, we obtain a 1 /e-\epsilon approximation in O(\log(n/\epsilon)\log( 1/\epsilon)\log(n+ m)/\epsilon^2) rounds of adaptivity and evaluations of the function and its gradient .
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Original:  For non-monotone functions, we obtain a 1 /e-\epsilon approximation using O(\log(n/\epsilon)\log( 1/\epsilon)\log(n+ m)/\epsilon^2) rounds of adaptivity and evaluations of the function and its gradient .
Revised:  For non-monotone functions, we obtain a 1 /e-\epsilon approximation using O(\log(n/\epsilon)\log( m)/\epsilon^2) rounds of adaptivity and evaluations of the function and its gradient .
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Original:  Our results apply more generally to the problem of maximizing a diminishing returns submodular (DR-submodular) function subject to packing constraints .
Revised:  Our results apply more generally to the problem of maximizing a diminishing returns submodular (DR-submodular) function .
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Original:  Relative to RPA predictions, however, the simulated sequence-dependent variation in T^*_{\rm cr} is often---though not always---smaller, whereas the simulated critical volume fractions are higher.
Revised:  Relative to RPA , the simulated sequence-dependent variation in T^*_{\rm cr} is often---though not always---smaller, whereas the simulated critical volume fractions are higher.
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Original:  Moreover, accurate mechanistic models of skin sublayers featuring appendageal routes, e.g. hair follicles, sweat glands, et cetera  will help with the development and efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
Revised:  Moreover, accurate mechanistic models of skin sublayers featuring appendageal routes, e.g. hair follicles, pilosebaceous glands, et cetera will help with the development and efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
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Original:  Moreover, accurate mechanistic models of skin sublayers featuring appendageal routes, e.g. hair follicles, sweat glands, et cetera  will help with the development and efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
Revised:  Moreover, accurate mechanistic models of skin sublayers featuring appendageal routes, e.g. hair follicles, sweat glands, et cetera , will help with the development and efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
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Original:  Moreover, accurate mechanistic models of skin sublayers featuring appendageal routes, e.g. hair follicles, sweat glands, et cetera  will help with the development and efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
Revised:  Moreover, accurate mechanistic models of skin sublayers featuring appendageal routes, e.g. hair follicles, sweat glands, et cetera will help with developing efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
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Original:  This review presents  the modelling categories reported in the scientific literature so far, classified in terms of complexity and capabilities .
Revised:  This review presents a classification of the modelling categories reported in the scientific literature so far, classified in terms of complexity and capabilities .
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Original:  This review presents  the modelling categories reported in the scientific literature so far, classified in terms of complexity and capabilities .
Revised:  This review presents the modelling categories reported in the scientific literature so far, discussing their capabilities and limitations .
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Original:  Finally, modern approaches , known as Physiologically-Based Pharmacokinetic Models, which feature the morphology of physiological aspects of the skin such as the stratum corneum and the hair follicle are presented and their limitations and purposes discussed, providing hints on potential future directions .
Revised:  Finally, modern approaches , known as Physiologically-Based Pharmacokinetic Models, which feature the morphological aspects of the skin such as the stratum corneum and the hair follicle are presented and their limitations and purposes discussed, providing hints on potential future directions .
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Original:  Moreover, accurate mechanistic models of skin sublayers featuring appendageal routes, e.g. hair follicles, pilosebaceous glands, et cetera, will help with developing efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
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Original:  First, Quantitative Structure Permeability Relationships (QSPR) are presented and discussed, followed by Physiologically-Based Pharmacokinetic Models (PBPK) , which include the compartmental approach where each skin sublayer is characterised by a linearized diffusion equation;
Revised:  First, Quantitative Structure Permeability Relationships (QSPR) are presented and discussed, followed by Physiologically-Based Pharmacokinetic Models (PBPK) . PBPK models include the compartmental approach where each skin sublayer is characterised by a linearized diffusion equation;
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Original:  First, Quantitative Structure Permeability Relationships (QSPR) are presented and discussed, followed by Physiologically-Based Pharmacokinetic Models (PBPK) , which include the compartmental approach where each skin sublayer is characterised by a linearized diffusion equation;
Revised:  First, Quantitative Structure Permeability Relationships (QSPR) are presented and discussed, followed by Physiologically-Based Pharmacokinetic Models (PBPK) , which include the compartmental approach ,
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Original:  and modelling approaches based on the solution of the diffusion equations, which feature the morphological aspects of the skin  such as the stratum corneum and the hair follicle.
Revised:  and modelling approaches based on the solution of the diffusion equations, which feature the morphological aspects of the skin ( such as the stratum corneum and the hair follicle.
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Original: Interest for in silico skin xenobiotic absorption models has been growing in the last years owing to the economic advantage of computer simulations over costly experimental procedures .
Revised: Interest for in silico modelling of the absorption of xenobiotics into the skin has been growing in the last years owing to the economic advantage of computer simulations over costly experimental procedures .
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Original:  First, Quantitative Structure Permeability Relationships (QSPR) are presented and discussed, followed by Physiologically-Based Pharmacokinetic Models (PBPK) . PBPK models include the compartmental approach, and modelling approaches based on the solution of the discretized diffusion equations in geometric representations of the skin in a Computational-Fluid-Dynamics-like manner.
Revised:  First, Quantitative Structure Permeability Relationships (QSPR) are presented and discussed, followed by Physiologically-Based Pharmacokinetic (PBPK) . PBPK models include the compartmental approach, and modelling approaches based on the solution of the discretized diffusion equations in geometric representations of the skin in a Computational-Fluid-Dynamics-like manner.
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Original:  The latter modelling category allows the user to represent relevant morphological elements of the skin ( such as the  stratum corneum, the hair follicles, and the pilosebaceous glands), and are expected to help with the development of efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
Revised:  The latter modelling category allows the user to represent relevant morphological elements of the skin such as the stratum corneum, the hair follicles, and the pilosebaceous glands), and are expected to help with the development of efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
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Original:  The latter modelling category allows the user to represent relevant morphological elements of the skin ( such as the  stratum corneum, the hair follicles, and the pilosebaceous glands), and are expected to help with the development of efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
Revised:  The latter modelling category allows the user to represent relevant morphological elements of the skin ( such as the bricks and mortar description of the stratum corneum, the hair follicles, and the pilosebaceous glands), and are expected to help with the development of efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
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Original:  The latter modelling category allows the user to represent relevant morphological elements of the skin ( such as the  stratum corneum, the hair follicles, and the pilosebaceous glands), and are expected to help with the development of efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
Revised:  The latter modelling category allows the user to represent relevant morphological elements of the skin ( such as the stratum corneum, hair follicles, and the pilosebaceous glands), and are expected to help with the development of efficient delivery of cosmetic products and medical drugs.
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Original:  In addition, we propose Pallex , a parallel execution framework built on top of the systemd init system to run a user application concurrently with userspace initialization.
Revised:  In addition, we propose 'Pallex' , a parallel execution framework built on top of the systemd init system to run a user application concurrently with userspace initialization.
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Original:  In addition, we propose Pallex , a parallel execution framework built on top of the systemd init system to run a user application concurrently with userspace initialization.
Revised:  In addition, we propose Pallex , a parallel execution framework built on top of the 'systemd init' system to run a user application concurrently with userspace initialization.
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Original: We analyze a large-scale mobile phone call dataset with the metadata of the mobile phone users, including age, gender, and billing locality , to uncover the nature of relationships between peers or individuals of similar ages .
Revised: We analyze a large-scale mobile phone call dataset containing information on the age, gender, and billing locality , to uncover the nature of relationships between peers or individuals of similar ages .
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Original: We analyze a large-scale mobile phone call dataset with the metadata of the mobile phone users, including age, gender, and billing locality , to uncover the nature of relationships between peers or individuals of similar ages .
Revised: We analyze a large-scale mobile phone call dataset with the metadata of the mobile phone users, including age, gender, and billing locality of users to get insight into social closeness in pairs of individuals of similar ages .
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Original: We analyze a large-scale mobile phone call dataset with the metadata of the mobile phone users, including age, gender, and billing locality , to uncover the nature of relationships between peers or individuals of similar ages .
Revised: We analyze a large-scale mobile phone call dataset with the metadata of the mobile phone users, including age, gender, and billing locality , to uncover the nature of relationships between peers or individuals of similar age .
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Original:  We show that in addition to the age and gender of users, the information about the ranks of users to each other in their egocentric networks is crucial in characterizing intimate and casual relationships of peers.
Revised:  We show that in addition to using the demographic information, the ranking of contacts by their call frequency in egocentric networks is crucial in characterizing intimate and casual relationships of peers.
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Original:  The opposite-gender pairs in intimate relationships are found to show the highest levels of call frequency and daily regularity, consistent with small-scale studies on romantic partners.
Revised:  The opposite-gender pairs show the highest levels of call frequency and daily regularity, consistent with small-scale studies on romantic partners.
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Original:  The opposite-gender pairs in intimate relationships are found to show the highest levels of call frequency and daily regularity, consistent with small-scale studies on romantic partners.
Revised:  The opposite-gender pairs in intimate relationships are found to show the highest levels of call frequency and daily regularity, which is consistent with the behavior of real-life romantic partners.
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Original:  This is followed by the same-gender pairs in intimate relationships , while the lowest call frequency and daily regularity are observed for the pairsin casual relationships.
Revised:  At somewhat lower level of call frequency and daily regularity come the mutually top-ranked same-gender pairs in intimate relationships , while the lowest call frequency and daily regularity are observed for the pairsin casual relationships.
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Original:  This is followed by the same-gender pairs in intimate relationships , while the lowest call frequency and daily regularity are observed for the pairsin casual relationships.
Revised:  This is followed by the same-gender pairs , while the lowest call frequency and daily regularity are observed for the pairsin casual relationships.
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Original:  We expect that a more detailed analysis can help us better characterize the nature of peer relationships and distinguish various types of relations, such as siblings, friends, and romantic partners , more clearly .
Revised:  We expect that a more detailed analysis can help us better characterize the nature of relationships between pairs of individuals and distinguish between various types of relations, such as siblings, friends, and romantic partners , more clearly .
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Original:  We expect that a more detailed analysis can help us better characterize the nature of peer relationships and distinguish various types of relations, such as siblings, friends, and romantic partners , more clearly .
Revised:  We expect that a more detailed analysis can help us better characterize the nature of peer relationships and distinguish various types of relations, such as siblings, friends, and romantic partners .
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