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Original: European Union European Union (EU) Agriculture Commissioner Mariann Fischer Boel pledged in aid to dairy farmers yesterday after weeks of protests.
Revised: European Union (EU) Agriculture Commissioner Mariann Fischer Boel pledged in aid to dairy farmers yesterday after weeks of protests.
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Original:  "I don't have a special account in Switzerland or anywhere else," she said at an EU Farm conference in Luxembourg where farmers were holding their third protest in as many weeks.
Revised:  "I don't have a special account in Switzerland or anywhere else," she said at an EU farm conference in Luxembourg where farmers were holding their third protest in as many weeks.
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Original: The offer comes after weeks of demonstrations emdash;
Revised: The offer comes after weeks of demonstrations —
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Original:  at one in Belgium  recently dumped three million litres (660,000 gallons) of milk on fields emdash;
Revised:  at one in Belgium recently dumped three million litres (660,000 gallons) of milk on fields —
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Original:  and requests from 21 EU member states for emergency aid for their farmers .
Revised:  and requests from 21 EU member states for emergency aid .
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Original:  This comes in addition to the announcement last month that the EU would change state aid rules to allow temporary aid payments of up to 15,000 euros to each farmer   
Revised:  This comes in addition to the announcement last month that the EU would change state aid rules to allow temporary aid payments of up to 15,000 euros to each farmer . 
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Original:  Currently the quotas are aimed at supporting prices, as the demand for dairy products has plummeted throughout the economic crisis;
Revised:  The quotas are aimed at supporting prices, as the demand for dairy products has plummeted throughout the economic crisis;
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Original:  This comes in addition to the announcement last month that the EU would change state aid rules to allow temporary aid payments of up to 15, 000 euros to each farmer.
Revised:  This comes in addition to the announcement last month that the EU would modify rules to allow temporary aid payments of up to 15, 000 euros to each farmer.
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Original:  This comes in addition to the announcement last month that the EU would change state aid rules to allow temporary aid payments of up to 15, 000 euros to each farmer.
Revised:  This comes in addition to the announcement last month that the EU would change state aid rules to allow temporary state aid payments; each farmer could receive a maximum of € 15, 000 euros to each farmer.
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Original:  This comes in addition to the announcement last month that the EU would change state aid rules to allow temporary aid payments of up to 15, 000 euros to each farmer.
Revised:  This comes in addition to the announcement last month that the EU would change state aid rules to allow temporary aid payments of up to 15, 000.
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Original:  In November, EU agriculture ministers planned to scrap milk quotas completely by 2015.
Revised:  Last November, EU agriculture ministers planned to scrap milk quotas completely by 2015.
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Original:  In November, EU agriculture ministers planned to scrap milk quotas completely by 2015.
Revised:  In November, EU agriculture ministers planned to abolish milk quotas completely by 2015.
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Original:  These temporary measures seek to alleviate temporary problems, but the commission still intends to abolish the quota system for milk, and reduce market intervention which help support prices
Revised:  These temporary measures seek to alleviate temporary problems, but the commission still intends to scrap the quota system for milk, and reduce market intervention which help support prices
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Original:  These temporary measures seek to alleviate temporary problems, but the commission still intends to abolish the quota system for milk, and reduce market intervention which help support prices
Revised:  These temporary measures seek to alleviate temporary problems, but the commission still intends to abolish the quota system for milk, and reduce market intervention which helps support prices
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Original: File:Flag of Europe.svg | 170px|Mohamed ElBaradei European Union (EU) Agriculture Commissioner Mariann Fischer Boel pledged in aid to dairy farmers yesterday after weeks of protests.
Revised: File:Flag of Europe.svg | European Union (EU) Agriculture Commissioner Mariann Fischer Boel pledged in aid to dairy farmers yesterday after weeks of protests.
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Original:  in some cases, prices have halved in 2007.
Revised:  in some cases, prices have halved since 2007.
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Original:  These temporary measures seek to alleviate temporary problems, but the commission still intends to scrap the quota system for milk, and reduce market intervention which helps support prices
Revised:  These measures seek to alleviate temporary problems, but the commission still intends to scrap the quota system for milk, and reduce market intervention which helps support prices
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Original: 160px|European UnionEuropean Union (EU) Agriculture Commissioner Mariann Fischer Boel pledged  in aid to dairy farmers yesterday after weeks of protests.
Revised: 160px|European Union European Union (EU) Agriculture Commissioner Mariann Fischer Boel pledged in aid to dairy farmers yesterday after weeks of protests.
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Original:  She said she would "empty her pockets", but that was as much as she could offer . "I don't have a special account in Switzerland or anywhere else," she said at an EU farm conference in Luxembourg where farmers were holding their third protest in as many weeks.
Revised:  She said she would "empty her pockets", but that was as much as she could offer ; "I don't have a special account in Switzerland or anywhere else," she said at an EU farm conference in Luxembourg where farmers were holding their third protest in as many weeks.
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Original:  She said she would "empty her pockets", but that was as much as she could offer . "I don't have a special account in Switzerland or anywhere else," she said at an EU farm conference in Luxembourg where farmers were holding their third protest in as many weeks.
Revised:  She said she would "empty her pockets", but that was as much as she could offer . "I don't have a special account in Switzerland or anywhere else," she commented at an EU farm conference in Luxembourg where farmers were holding their third protest in as many weeks.
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Original: The offer comes after weeks of demonstrations—in Belgium farmers recently dumped three million litres (660,000 gallons) of milk on fields — and requests from 21 EU member states for emergency aid.
Revised: A recent demonstration in Belgium saw farmers dump three million litres (660,000 gallons) of milk on fields — and requests from 21 EU member states for emergency aid.
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Original:  This comes in addition to the announcement in September that the EU would modify rules to allow temporary state aid payments;
Revised:  This is in addition to the announcement in September that the EU would modify rules to allow temporary state aid payments;
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Original: During this morning's ceremonial swearing-in at the national assembly in w: Jakarta, broadcast throughout the country, he swore to uphold the constitution on the Qu'ran;
Revised: During this morning's ceremonial swearing-in at the national assembly in Jakarta, broadcast throughout the country, he swore to uphold the constitution on the Qu'ran;
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Original:  Under his previous term he had worked to remove corruption with the Corruption Eradication Commission.
Revised:  Under his previous term he worked to remove corruption with the Corruption Eradication Commission.
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Original: During this morning's ceremonial swearing-in at the national assembly in Jakarta, broadcast throughout the country, he swore to uphold the constitution on the Qu'ran;
Revised: During yeserday morning's ceremonial swearing-in at the national assembly in Jakarta, broadcast throughout the country, he swore to uphold the constitution on the Qu'ran;
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Original:  The president won just over 60\% in July's elections, well ahead of main rival Megawati Sukarnoputri, former president and daughter of ex-president Sukarno, who brought the archipeligo to independence.
Revised:  The president won just over 60\% in July's elections, well ahead of main rival Megawati Sukarnoputri, former president and daughter of ex-president Sukarno, who brought the archipelago to independence.
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Original:  Megawati and former vice-president Jusuf Kalla challenged the results, claiming irregularities in votes, but in August the Constitutional Court ruled that the claims were foundless .
Revised:  Megawati and former vice-president Jusuf Kalla challenged the results, claiming irregularities in votes, but in August the Constitutional Court ruled that the claims were unfounded .
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Original:  His other tasks include handling recovery from the recent earthquakes, combatting terrorism, instigating bureaucratic and labour law reforms, and improving infrastructure  
Revised:  His other tasks include handling recovery from the recent earthquakes, combating terrorism, instigating bureaucratic and labour law reforms, and improving infrastructure 
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Original:  His other tasks include handling recovery from the recent earthquakes, combatting terrorism, instigating bureaucratic and labour law reforms, and improving infrastructure  
Revised:  His other tasks include handling recovery from the recent earthquakes, combatting terrorism, instigating bureaucratic and labour law reforms, and improving infrastructure . 
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Original: File:SusiloBambangYudhoyono.jpg| | Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono]]President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono has been sworn in for a second five-year term as president of Indonesia.
Revised: File:SusiloBambangYudhoyono.jpg| Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono]]President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono has been sworn in for a second five-year term as president of Indonesia.
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Original: File:SusiloBambangYudhoyono.jpg|Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono has been sworn in for a second five-year term as president of Indonesia.
Revised:  President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono has been sworn in for a second five-year term as president of Indonesia.
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Original: File:SusiloBambangYudhoyono.jpg|Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono has been sworn in for a second five-year term as president of Indonesia.
Revised: File:SusiloBambangYudhoyono.jpg|Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono President has been sworn in for a second five-year term as president of Indonesia.
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Original:  Indonesia is the largest Muslim country in the world, with 234 million people, of which around 85\% are Muslim.
Revised:  Indonesia is the largest country in the world, with 234 million people, of which around 85\% are Muslim.
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Original:  Megawati and former vice-president Jusuf Kalla challenged the results, claiming irregularities in votes, but in August the Constitutional Court ruled that the claims were unfounded.
Revised:  Megawati and former vice-president challenged the results, claiming irregularities in votes, but in August the Constitutional Court ruled that the claims were unfounded.
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Original:  Megawati and former vice-president Jusuf Kalla challenged the results, claiming irregularities in votes, but in August the Constitutional Court ruled that the claims were unfounded.
Revised:  Megawati and former vice-president Jusuf Kalla challenged the results, claiming irregularities in votes, but in August the ruled that the claims were unfounded.
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Original:  The producer then apologised 4 months later, saying : " The  ribbing may have gone a tad too far on this occasion."
Revised:  The producer then apologised four months later, saying : " The ribbing may have gone a tad too far on this occasion."
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Original:  The producer then apologised 4 months later, saying : " The  ribbing may have gone a tad too far on this occasion."
Revised:  The producer then apologised 4 months later, saying , " The ribbing may have gone a tad too far on this occasion."
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Original:  The producer then apologised 4 months later, saying : " The  ribbing may have gone a tad too far on this occasion."
Revised:  The producer then apologised 4 months later, saying : " t ribbing may have gone a tad too far on this occasion."
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Original:  The producer then apologised 4 months later, saying : " The  ribbing may have gone a tad too far on this occasion."
Revised:  The producer then apologised 4 months later, saying : " The he ribbing may have gone a tad too far on this occasion."
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Original:  This information came through 17 days after the BBC announced that Frankie Boyle would be leaving the panel of the show after being a regular panellist since the show started in June 2005 due to "other television commitments" , as the corporation said .
Revised:  This information came through seventeen days after the BBC announced that Frankie Boyle would be leaving the panel of the show after being a regular panellist since the show started in June 2005 due to "other television commitments" , as the corporation said .
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Original:  This information came through 17 days after the BBC announced that Frankie Boyle would be leaving the panel of the show after being a regular panellist since the show started in June 2005 due to "other television commitments" , as the corporation said .
Revised:  This information came through 17 days after the BBC announced that Frankie Boyle would be leaving the panel of the show after being a regular panellist since the show started in June 2005 due to "other television commitments" .
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Original: Scottish comedian Frankie Boyle, who is a panelist on the satirical gameshow, made the comments about the swimmer.
Revised: Scottish comedian Frankie Boyle, at the time a panelist on the satirical gameshow, made the comments about the swimmer.
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Original:  ]  This information came through seventeen days after the BBC announced that Frankie Boyle would be leaving the panel of the show after being a regular panellist since the show started in June 2005 due to "other television commitments".
Revised:  from Beijing] This information came through seventeen days after the BBC announced that Frankie Boyle would be leaving the panel of the show after being a regular panellist since the show started in June 2005 due to "other television commitments".
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Original: Kapil Sibal, Minister of Human Resource Development, India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by making the entrance percentage as 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other small changes.
Revised: Kapil Sibal, Minister of Human Resource Development, India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by increasing the entrance percentage as 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other small changes.
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Original: Kapil Sibal, Minister of Human Resource Development, India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by making the entrance percentage as 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other small changes.
Revised: Kapil Sibal, Minister of Human Resource Development, India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by making the entrance percentage to 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other small changes.
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Original: Kapil Sibal, Minister of Human Resource Development, India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by making the entrance percentage as 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other small changes.
Revised: Kapil Sibal, Minister of Human Resource Development, India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by making the entrance percentage as 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other minor changes.
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Original:  This is not acceptable." pointing  that the current criteria where students getting more than 60\% in the board exam of twelfth class is not good and it has to be raised to 80\% - 85\%.
Revised:  This is not acceptable." pointing out that the current criteria where students getting more than 60\% in the board exam of twelfth class is not good and it has to be raised to 80\% - 85\%.
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Original:  This is not acceptable." pointing  that the current criteria where students getting more than 60\% in the board exam of twelfth class is not good and it has to be raised to 80\% - 85\%.
Revised:  This is not acceptable." pointing that the current criteria where students getting more than 60\% in the board exam of twelfth class is not good enough and that it has to be raised to 80\% - 85\%.
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Original: Kapil Sibal,  Minister of Human Resource Development , India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by increasing the entrance percentage to 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other minor changes .
Revised: Kapil Sibal, India's Minister of Human Resource Development , India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by increasing the entrance percentage to 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other minor changes .
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Original: Kapil Sibal,  Minister of Human Resource Development , India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by increasing the entrance percentage to 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other minor changes .
Revised: Kapil Sibal, Minister of Human Resource Development (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by increasing the entrance percentage to 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other minor changes .
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Original: Kapil Sibal,  Minister of Human Resource Development , India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology in India (IIT) sector by increasing the entrance percentage to 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other minor changes .
Revised: Kapil Sibal, Minister of Human Resource Development , India (HRD) held a meeting on October 19 to state his plans to reform the Indian Institutes of Technology (IIT) sector by increasing the entrance percentage to 80\% and above in the board exams of twelfth class and other minor changes .
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Original:  This is not acceptable." pointing out that the current criteria where students getting more than 60\% in the board exam of the twelfth class are elligible for IIT-JEE is not good enough and that it has to be raised to 80\%- 85\% . He also stated that students do not value twelfth class board exams and they prepare for the Indian Institute of Technology Joint Entrance Examination (JEE).
Revised:  This is not acceptable." pointing out that the current criteria where students getting more than 60\% in the board exam of the twelfth class are elligible for IIT-JEE is not good enough and that it has to be raised to 80-85\% . He also stated that students do not value twelfth class board exams and they prepare for the Indian Institute of Technology Joint Entrance Examination (JEE).
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Original:  The meeting decided that they would set up two committees, one headed by Anil Kakodkar, Atomic Energy Commission ( chief ) and other by T. Ramasamy, Department of Science and Technology (Secretary).
Revised:  The meeting decided that they would set up two committees, one headed by Anil Kakodkar, Atomic Energy Commission ( Chairman ) and other by T. Ramasamy, Department of Science and Technology (Secretary).
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Original:  The first committee is scheduled to decide about the twelfth board percentage and the second one is scheduled to decide the curriculum.
Revised:  The first committee is scheduled to decide about the twelfth board percentage and the second one is scheduled to set the curriculum.
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Original:  The Kakodkar committee is also scheduled to decide how to get rid of coaching institutes and how to move IIT field forward with a greater emphasis on research.
Revised:  The Kakodkar committee also plans to decide how to get rid of coaching institutes and how to move IIT field forward with a greater emphasis on research.
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Original:  The minister also clarified that some of these will be implemented from the 2010 session and some from 2011 session .
Revised:  The minister also clarified that some of these will be implemented from the 2010 and some from 2011 session .
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Original:  The meeting was also expected to reduce the fee for African and South Asian Association for Regional Cooperation (SAARC) countries as their fees are higher than that of Indians.
Revised:  The meeting was also expected to reduce the fee for African and South Asian Association for Regional Cooperation (SAARC) countries as their fees are higher than those of Indians.
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Original:  The review committee says that people of other countries are tempted to study in India but they do not because of high fees.
Revised:  The review committee says that people of other countries are tempted to study in India but they refrain due to high fees.
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Original: He also stated that students do not value final year board exams and they prepare for the Indian Institute of Technology Joint Entrance Examination (JEE).
Revised: He also stated that students undervalue final year board exams and they prepare for the Indian Institute of Technology Joint Entrance Examination (JEE).
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Original: He also stated that students do not value final year board exams and they prepare for the Indian Institute of Technology Joint Entrance Examination (JEE).
Revised: He also stated that students do not value final year board exams , preparing instead for the Indian Institute of Technology Joint Entrance Examination (JEE).
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Original:  They join coaching institutes and concentrate on their study material and enter IIT.
Revised:  They enroll in coaching institutes and concentrate on their study material and enter IIT.
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Original:  They join coaching institutes and concentrate on their study material and enter IIT.
Revised:  They join coaching institutes and concentrate on their study material in order to enter IIT.
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Original:  He wants to get rid of these "teaching shops."
Revised:  He wants to abolish these "teaching shops."
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Original:  The Kakodkar committee also plans to decide how to get rid of coaching institutes and how to move IIT field forward with a greater emphasis on research.
Revised:  The Kakodkar committee also plans to decide how to abolish coaching institutes and how to move IIT field forward with a greater emphasis on research.
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