wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   Judging by the lists of the Jewish dead, it seems that Jews in mixed neighbourhoods stood a better chance of surviving the riots than those in uniformly Jewish areas."
Revised:  Judging by the lists of the Jewish dead, it seems that Jews in mixed neighborhoods stood a better chance of surviving the riots than those in uniformly Jewish areas."
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Original:  p. 350Esther Meir-Glitzenstein's book on zionism in Iraq, p. 213 Other historians, however, see the pivotal moment for the Iraqi Jewish community much later, between 1948–51, since Jewish communities prospered along with the rest of the country throughout most of the 1940s, and many Jews who left Iraq following the Farhud returned to the country shortly thereafter and permanent emigration did not accelerate significantly until 1950–51.
Revised:  p. 350 Other historians, however, see the pivotal moment for the Iraqi Jewish community much later, between 1948–51, since Jewish communities prospered along with the rest of the country throughout most of the 1940s, and many Jews who left Iraq following the Farhud returned to the country shortly thereafter and permanent emigration did not accelerate significantly until 1950–51.
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Original:  Iraqi government sources claim 180 Jews were killed and 1,000 injured, and up to 300–400 non-Jewish rioters were killed in the attempt to quell the violence.
Revised:  Over 180 Jews were killed and 1,000 injured, and up to 300–400 non-Jewish rioters were killed in the attempt to quell the violence.
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Original:  To avoid the reality of a British-organized countercoup, the regent entered Baghdad without a British escort.
Revised:  To avoid the impression of a British-organized countercoup, the regent entered Baghdad without a British escort.
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Original:  An investigation conducted by the journalist Tony Rocca of the Sunday Times attributes the delay to a personal decision by Kinahan Cornwallis, the British Ambassador to Iraq, who failed to immediately carry out orders he received from the Foreign Office in the matter, and initially denied requests from British Imperial military and civil officers on the scene for permission to act against the attacking Arab mobs.
Revised:  An investigation conducted by British journalist Tony Rocca of the Sunday Times attributes the delay to a personal decision by Kinahan Cornwallis, the British Ambassador to Iraq, who failed to immediately carry out orders he received from the Foreign Office in the matter, and initially denied requests from British Imperial military and civil officers on the scene for permission to act against the attacking Arab mobs.
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Original:  Other testimonies suggest the possibility that the British delayed their entry into Baghdad for 48 hours because they had an ulterior motive in allowing a clash between the sectarian populations within the capital city.
Revised:  The British also delayed their entry into Baghdad for 48 hours because they had an ulterior motive in allowing a clash between the sectarian populations within the capital city.
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Original:  Other testimonies suggest the possibility that the British delayed their entry into Baghdad for 48 hours because they had an ulterior motive in allowing a clash between the sectarian populations within the capital city.
Revised:  Other testimonies suggest the possibility that the British delayed their entry into Baghdad for 48 hours , which some testimonies suggest was due to having ulterior motives in allowing a clash between the sectarian populations within the capital city.
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Original:  Over 180 Jews were killed and 1,000 injured, and up to 300–400 non-Jewish rioters were killed in the attempt to quell the violence.
Revised:  Over 180 Jews were killed and 1,000 injured, although some non-Jewish rioters were killed in the attempt to quell the violence.
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Original:  Over 180 Jews were killed and 1,000 injured, and up to 300–400 non-Jewish rioters were killed in the attempt to quell the violence.
Revised:  Over 180 Jews were killed and 1,000 injured, and up to 300–400 non-Jewish rioters were killed attempting to quell the violence.
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Original:  Over 180 Jews were killed and 1,000 injured, although some non-Jewish rioters were killed attempting to quell the violence.
Revised:  Over 180 Jews were killed and 1,000 injured, although some non-Jewish rioters were also killed in the attempt to quell the violence.
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Original:  He was educated at the Malay School in Kuala Pilah and completed his primary education at Darjah 6  during the Japanese occupation of Malaya from 1942–1945.
Revised:  He was educated at the Malay School in Kuala Pilah and completed his primary education at Darjah 6 ) during the Japanese occupation of Malaya from 1942–1945.
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Original: Sha'ari Tadin ( 2 August 1931 – 13 December 2009) was a Member of Parliament (MP), and Senior Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture in the Singapore Government.
Revised: Sha'ari Tadin ( 2 August 1931 – d.13 December 2009) was a Member of Parliament (MP), and Senior Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture in the Singapore Government.
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Original:  One of his former students from Jalan Daud Primary School was Zainul Abidin bin Mohamed Rasheed, currently Senior Minister of State at the Ministry of Foreign Affairs and Mayor of North East District of Singapore.
Revised:  One of his former students from Jalan Daud Primary School was Zainul Abidin bin Mohamed Rasheed, former Senior Minister of State at the Ministry of Foreign Affairs and Mayor of North East District of Singapore.
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Original:  b.2 August 1931 – d.13 December 2009)  was a Member of Parliament (MP), and Senior Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture in the Singapore Government.
Revised:  b.2 August 1931 – d.13 December 2009) was a Singaporean politician. He was a Member of Parliament (MP), and Senior Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture in the Singapore Government.
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Original: Teaching and scholarship Sha'ari taught in various primary schools between     1954 and 1960.
Revised: Teaching and scholarship Sha'ari taught in various primary schools between Career 1954 and 1960.
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Original:  One of his former students from Jalan Daud Primary School was Zainul Abidin bin Mohamed Rasheed, former Senior Minister of State at the Ministry of Foreign Affairs and Mayor of North East District of Singapore.
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Original:  He also tutored many students, one of whom was the son of the first President of Singapore, Yusof bin Ishak.
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Original:  Politics In the mid 1960s newly independent Singapore was facing problems such as mass unemployment, shortage of public housing as well as lack of land and natural resources.
Revised:  Political career In the mid 1960s newly independent Singapore was facing problems such as mass unemployment, shortage of public housing as well as lack of land and natural resources.
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Original:  First Malay graduate MP (1968) As one of the first few Singaporean Malay scholars in the 1960s, Sha'ari was approached by the Prime Minister of Singapore, Lee Kuan Yew, to join the People's Action Party (PAP) and to contest in the republic's general elections.
Revised:  As one of the first few Singaporean Malay scholars in the 1960s, Sha'ari was approached by the Prime Minister of Singapore, Lee Kuan Yew, to join the People's Action Party (PAP) and to contest in the republic's general elections.
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Original:  Member of Parliament for Kampong Chai Chee (1968–1976) In February 1968 Sha'ari retired temporarily from Government Service to enable him to stand as a PAP candidate for Kampong Chai Chee in the 1968 Singapore General Elections.
Revised:  In February 1968 Sha'ari retired temporarily from Government Service to enable him to stand as a PAP candidate for Kampong Chai Chee in the 1968 Singapore General Elections.
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Original:  Returning unopposed with over 75 percent of votes, Sha'ari became Member of Parliament for Kampong Chai Chee and the first Malay graduate PAP MP. Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture (1968–1972) In May 1968, at the age of 36, Sha'ari was appointed Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture.
Revised:  Returning unopposed with over 75 percent of votes, Sha'ari became Member of Parliament for Kampong Chai Chee Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture (1968–1972) In May 1968, at the age of 36, Sha'ari was appointed Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture.
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Original:  Returning unopposed with over 75 percent of votes, Sha'ari became Member of Parliament for Kampong Chai Chee and the first Malay graduate PAP MP. Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture (1968–1972) In May 1968, at the age of 36, Sha'ari was appointed Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture.
Revised:  Returning unopposed with over 75 percent of votes, Sha'ari became Member of Parliament for Kampong Chai Chee and the first Malay graduate PAP MP. In May 1968, at the age of 36, Sha'ari was appointed Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture.
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Original:  Returning unopposed with over 75 percent of votes, Sha'ari became Member of Parliament for Kampong Chai Chee and the first Malay graduate PAP MP. Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture (1968–1972) In May 1968, at the age of 36, Sha'ari was appointed Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture.
Revised:  Returning unopposed with over 75 percent of votes, Sha'ari became Member of Parliament for Kampong Chai Chee and the first Malay graduate PAP MP. Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture (1968–1972) In May 1968, Sha'ari was appointed Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture.
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Original:  Senior Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister for Culture (1972–1976) Within four years in office, Sha'ari he was promoted to Senior Parliamentary Secretary (Culture) in 1972.
Revised:  Within four years in office, Sha'ari he was promoted to Senior Parliamentary Secretary (Culture) in 1972.
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Original:   Other senior appointments Founder,
Revised:  Bedok became a constituency in 1976 under the charge of Sha'ari, who formed the Citizens' Consultative Committee. That same year he contested in the General Elections in Bedok constituency and was returned with a majority vote of nearly 75 percent. Other senior appointments Founder,
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On 28 September 1978, as the Member of Parliament for Bedok Constituency, he officially opened Bedok View Secondary School, the 139th school built by the government and the first government secondary school to be built within Bedok New Town.
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Original:  The principle of hypersociability is most widely used in Japan pop culture including Yu-Gi-Oh! and Pokémon.
Revised:  The principle of hypersociability is most widely used in Japanese pop culture including Yu-Gi-Oh! and Pokémon.
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Original:  Instead, storytellers encourage fans to tell the story themselves , whether the story is told over the Internet or through direct conversation.
Revised:  Instead, storytellers encourage fans to tell the story themselves either over the Internet or through direct conversation.
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Original:  The principle of hypersociability is most widely used in Japanese pop culture including Yu-Gi-Oh! and Pokémon.
Revised:  The principle of hypersociability is most widely used in Japanese pop culture , examples of which include Yu-Gi-Oh! and Pokémon.
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Original:  Hypersociability can also occasionally refer to a symptom of Williams syndrome characterized by the belief that everyone in the world is one's friend .
Revised:  Hypersociability can also occasionally refer to a symptom of Williams syndrome characterized by an unusual willingness to converse with others .
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Original: In the context of transmedia storytelling, hypersociability is the sharing of a story through ordinary social  discourse within a fan group.
Revised: In the context of transmedia storytelling, hypersociability is the sharing of a story through ordinary social interaction. A story may be shared through discourse within a fan group.
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Original:  Hypersociability removes the need for a publisher to offer fixed media.
Revised:  Hypersociability lessens the need for a publisher to offer fixed media.
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Original:  Instead, storytellers encourage fans to tell the story themselves either over the Internet or through direct conversation.
Revised:  Instead, storytellers hope that fans will build on the story themselves either over the Internet or through direct conversation.
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Original:  Jones et al., "Hypersociability in Williams Syndrome," Journal of Cognitive Neuroscience, volume 12, pages 30-46, (MIT Press, 2000  
Revised:  Jones et al., "Hypersociability in Williams Syndrome," Journal of Cognitive Neuroscience, volume 12, pages 30-46, (MIT Press, 2000 ). 
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Original:  The Wachowski Brothers deliberately incorporated elements of hypersociability for The Animatrix by seeking the help of Japanese animators.
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Original:  Hypersociability can also occasionally refer to a symptom of Williams syndrome characterized by an unusual willingness to converse with others.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Henry Jenkins, Convergence Culture: Where Old and New Media Collide (New York: New York University Press, 2006).
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Original: Season 6 upBellwood's final appearance, surrounded by flames in her room at La Mirage in "The Choice (a.k.a.) The Vendetta" (1986) Claudia survives the terrorist attack (although Luke does not) and returns to Denver, where she and Adam are married.
Revised: Season 6 Claudia survives the terrorist attack (although Luke does not) and returns to Denver, where she and Adam are married.
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Original: Claudia Mary Blaisdel Carrington is a fictional character from the ABC prime time soap opera Dynasty, created by Richard and Esther Shapiro.
Revised: Claudia Blaisdel Carrington is a fictional character from the ABC prime time soap opera Dynasty, created by Richard and Esther Shapiro.
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Original:  Dreaming of financial independence, a furious Claudia urges Adam to trick an ailing Blake into signing a power of attorney in order to reclaim ownership .
Revised:  Dreaming of financial independence, a furious Claudia blackmails Adam into using his ill-gotten power of attorney in order to reclaim ownership .
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Original:  Dynasty trivia - Shoulderpads.net Later, her character was absent from several episodes in the middle of the season while she delivered her baby.
Revised:  Later, her character was absent from several episodes in the middle of the season while she delivered her baby.
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Original:  The character was written out after the October 20, 1982  third season episode "The Wedding", but Claudia reappeared in the March 30, 1983, episode "The Dinner" later that season.
Revised:  The character was written out after the October 20, 1982 , third season episode "The Wedding", but Claudia reappeared in the March 30, 1983, episode "The Dinner" later that season.
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Original:  In the October 20, 1982  episode "The Wedding," Jeff and Fallon's son is recovered from the real kidnapper, and Claudia returns to the sanitarium.
Revised:  In the October 20, 1982 , episode "The Wedding," Jeff and Fallon's son is recovered from the real kidnapper, and Claudia returns to the sanitarium.
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Original:   Patrick said: 
Revised:  She noted, "Because this is a soap, Claudia is actually evil, rather than a good person the Carringtons screwed over. Purely good characters never last long on soaps, but making Claudia the killer absolves the Carringtons of everything and sends Claudia packing—at least for a little while." Harrington added, "I'm sure we haven't seen the last of Claudia—a sanitarium feels like the perfect place to store a character until a season finale". Patrick said: 
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Original: Pg 66,  Ormayil Vakkom Majeed (In memory of Vakkom Majeed  – K.M. Seethi, 2000
Revised: Pg 66, Ormayil Vakkom Majeed (In memory of Vakkom Majeed ) – K.M. Seethi, 2000
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Original:  For example, the United States of America rebuilt most of the roads, and the Canadians and Belgians each rebuilt a village.
Revised:  For example, the United States of America rebuilt most of the roads, and Canada and Belgium each rebuilt a village.
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Original: The main shock was followed by thousands of aftershocks, some of the larger ones causing additional damage and loss of life.
Revised: The main shock was followed by an unccountable number of aftershocks, some of the larger ones causing additional damage and loss of life.
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Original:  They bring water from Ganga to bathe Radha Madhava during their abhisheka ceremony.
Revised:  They bring water from Ganga to bathe Radha Madhaba during their abhisheka ceremony.
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Original:  A grand abhisheka is performed at midnight for the small Radha Madhava  Deities while food (bhoga) offering of more than 400 items is offered to Their Lordships with devotion.
Revised:  A grand abhisheka is performed at midnight for the small Radha Madhan Deities while food (bhoga) offering of more than 400 items is offered to Their Lordships with devotion.
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Original:  A grand abhisheka is performed at midnight for the small Radha Madhava  Deities while food (bhoga) offering of more than 400 items is offered to Their Lordships with devotion.
Revised:  A grand abhisheka is performed at midnight for the small Radha Madhava a Deities while food (bhoga) offering of more than 400 items is offered to Their Lordships with devotion.
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Original:  Religious festivals in Nepal Category:Krishna Category:Vaishnavism Category:Human towers Category:Birthdays Category:Religious festivals in Bangladesh Category:Religious festivals in Pakistan Category:Religious festivals in Fiji Category:Religious festivals in the United States Category:Religious festivals in Guyana Category:Religious festivals in Trinidad and Tobago Category:Religious festivals in Jamaica Category:Religious festivals in Suriname Category:Festivals in Ass
Revised:  Hindu festivals in Nepal Category:Krishna Category:Vaishnavism Category:Human towers Category:Birthdays Category:Religious festivals in Bangladesh Category:Religious festivals in Pakistan Category:Religious festivals in Fiji Category:Religious festivals in the United States Category:Religious festivals in Guyana Category:Religious festivals in Trinidad and Tobago Category:Religious festivals in Jamaica Category:Religious festivals in Suriname Category:Festivals in Ass
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Original:  It is observed according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar, on the eighth day (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Bhadrapada, which overlaps with August or September of the Gregorian calendar.
Revised:  It is observed according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar, on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Bhadrapada, which overlaps with August or September of the Gregorian calendar.
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Original:  It is observed according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar,   on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Shravana / Bhadrapada Masa.
Revised:  According to Hindu lunisolar calendar, on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Shravana / Bhadrapada Masa.
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Original:  It is observed according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar,   on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Shravana / Bhadrapada Masa.
Revised:  It is observed according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar, i on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Shravana / Bhadrapada Masa.
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Original:  It is observed according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar,   on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Shravana / Bhadrapada Masa.
Revised:  It is observed according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar, t is observed on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Shravana / Bhadrapada Masa.
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Original:  It is observed according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar,   on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Shravana / Bhadrapada Masa.
Revised:  It is observed according to the Hindu lunisolar calendar, on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Bhadrapada Masa.
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Original:  According to Hindu lunisolar calendar, i t is observed on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Bhadrapada Masa.
Revised:  According to Hindu lunisolar calendar, t is observed on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Bhadrapada Masa.
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Original:  According to Hindu lunisolar calendar, i t is observed on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Bhadrapada Masa.
Revised:  According to Hindu lunisolar calendar, i it is observed on the eighth tithi (Ashtami) of the Krishna Paksha (dark fortnight) in Bhadrapada Masa.
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Original:  For example, in downhill skiing, as the skier is accelerated down the hill by the force of gravity, her gravitational potential energy is converted to kinetic energy, the energy of motion.
Revised:  For example, in downhill skiing, as the skier is accelerated down the hill by the force of gravity, their gravitational potential energy is converted to kinetic energy, the energy of motion.
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Original: Association football midfielders Category:Footballers from Béjaïa Category:Algerian footballers Category:Algerian expatriate footballers Category:Algeria international footballers Category:CS Sedan Ardennes players Category:CR Belouizdad players Category:Paris Saint-Germain F.C. players Category:OGC Nice players Category:Ligue 1 players Category:Ligue 2 players Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:1982 FIFA World Cup players Category:1982 African Cup of Nations playe
Revised: Association football midfielders Category:Footballers from Béjaïa Category:Algerian footballers Category:Algerian expatriate footballers Category:Algeria international footballers Category:CS Sedan Ardennes players Category:CR Belouizdad players Category:Paris Saint-Germain F.C. players Category:OGC Nice players Category:Ligue 1 players Category:Ligue 2 players Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:1982 FIFA World Cup playe
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Original: He holds the records of being the second highest goalscorer for Paris Saint-Germain in the French first division and third all-time goalscorer in all competitions.
Revised: He holds the records of being the third highest goalscorer for Paris Saint-Germain in the French first division and third all-time goalscorer in all competitions.
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Original: Career Dahleb played with the Algerian national team in the 1982 FIFA World Cup, where Algeria failed to make it out of the group stage.
Revised: Career Dahleb played with the Algeria national team in the 1982 FIFA World Cup, where Algeria failed to make it out of the group stage.
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Original:  Having begun his career at CS Sedan and CR Belouizdad, he spent most of his career at Paris Saint-Germain before playing a final season at OGC Nice.
Revised:  Having begun his career at Sedan and CR Belouizdad, he spent most of his career at Paris Saint-Germain before playing a final season at OGC Nice.
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