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Original:  Six primary stakeholder groups at Elite Care, each with its own set of needs and responsibilities, use the computing environments: The elderly residents Families of the residents Physicians and health care providers Staff caregivers The Elite Care management team that monitors the staff and residents The system has bolstered national media attention for the company.
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Original:  They have also garnered attention from local media sources: The Oregonian applauded their "innovative blend of high technology and old fashioned family ties" in an article written on May 28, 2008.
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Original:  (2006). Secret Memoirs of the Shoguns: Isaac Titsingh and Japan, 1779-1822 , p. 222 n65.
Revised:  (2006). Secret Memoirs of the Shoguns: Isaac Titsingh and Japan, 1779–1822 , p. 222 n65.
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Original:  He was also a daimyo of the Sagara Domain.
Revised:  He was also a daimyō of the Sagara Domain.
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Original:  The Making of Modern Japan, pp. 240-241.
Revised:  The Making of Modern Japan, pp. 240–241.
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Original: Screech, pp. 148-151, 163-170 , 248.
Revised: Screech, pp. 148–151, 163–170 , 248.
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Original:  (1955). Tanuma Okitsugu, 1719-1788 : Forerunner of Modern Japan.
Revised:  (1955). Tanuma Okitsugu, 1719–1788 : Forerunner of Modern Japan.
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Original:  (2006). Secret Memoirs of the Shoguns: Isaac Titsingh and Japan, 1779-1822.
Revised:  (2006). Secret Memoirs of the Shoguns: Isaac Titsingh and Japan, 1779–1822.
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Original:  (1820). '' Mémoires et anecdotes sur la dynastie régnante des djogouns, souverains du Japon.
Revised:  (1820). Mémoires et anecdotes sur la dynastie régnante des djogouns, souverains du Japon.
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Original: (September 11, 1719  in Edo, Japan – August 25, 1788  in Edo) was a chamberlain (sobashū) and a senior counselorrōjū to the shogun Tokugawa Ieharu .
Revised: (September 11, 1719 , in Edo, Japan – August 25, 1788 in Edo) was a chamberlain (sobashū) and a senior counselorrōjū to the shogun Tokugawa Ieharu .
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Original: (September 11, 1719  in Edo, Japan – August 25, 1788  in Edo) was a chamberlain (sobashū) and a senior counselorrōjū to the shogun Tokugawa Ieharu .
Revised: (September 11, 1719 in Edo, Japan – August 25, 1788 , in Edo) was a chamberlain (sobashū) and a senior counselorrōjū to the shogun Tokugawa Ieharu .
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Original: (September 11, 1719  in Edo, Japan – August 25, 1788  in Edo) was a chamberlain (sobashū) and a senior counselorrōjū to the shogun Tokugawa Ieharu .
Revised: (September 11, 1719 in Edo, Japan – August 25, 1788 in Edo) was a chamberlain (sobashū) and a senior counselor (rōjū) to the shogun Tokugawa Ieharu .
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Original: (September 11, 1719, in Edo, Japan – August 25, 1788, in Edo) was a chamberlain (sobashū) and a senior counselor (rōjū) to the shogun Tokugawa Ieharu .
Revised: (September 11, 1719, in Edo, Japan – August 25, 1788, in Edo) was a chamberlain (sobashū) and a senior counselor (rōjū) to the shōgun Tokugawa Ieharu .
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Original:  Jensen , p. 241 The result was that the reforms and the relaxation of the strictures of sakoku were blocked.
Revised:  Jansen , p. 241 The result was that the reforms and the relaxation of the strictures of sakoku were blocked.
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Original:  He used the title Tonomo-no-kami.
Revised:  Tanuma used the title Tonomo-no-kami.
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Original:  The reforms aimed to rectify the systemic problems in the economy, particularly the trade imbalance between the provinces  and the shogunal areas  of Japan.
Revised:  Tanuma's reforms aimed to rectify the systemic problems in the economy, particularly the trade imbalance between the provinces and the shogunal areas of Japan.
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Original:  The reforms aimed to rectify the systemic problems in the economy, particularly the trade imbalance between the provinces  and the shogunal areas  of Japan.
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Original:  He took steps to increase the foreign trade and set export quotas for Akita copper mines ( the copper being the primary coinage metal during that period), despite higher domestic prices.
Revised:  He took steps to increase foreign exports and set export quotas for Akita copper mines ( the copper being the primary coinage metal during that period), despite higher domestic prices.
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Original:  He took steps to increase the foreign trade and set export quotas for Akita copper mines ( the copper being the primary coinage metal during that period), despite higher domestic prices.
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Original:  The program failed .
Revised:  Despite Tanuma's intentions to serve the public good, he was deeply corrupt and exacerbated corruption in government .
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Original:  Several years of crop failures  , resulting from drought followed by floods, led to famine  . Category:1719 births Category:1788 deaths Category:Daimyo Category:Rōjū Category:Japanese pag 
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Original: ` Abd ar-Rahman, Abdurrahman or Darman was Shehu of Borno from 1853 to 1854.
Revised:  Abd ar-Rahman, Abdurrahman or Darman was Shehu of Borno from 1853 to 1854.
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Original:  Reign of ` Abd ar-Rahman With the help of some courtiers of Kukawa, ` Abd ar-Rahman deposed his brother Umar in November 1853 and became Shehu of Borno.
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Original:  Reign of ` Abd ar-Rahman With the help of some courtiers of Kukawa, ` Abd ar-Rahman deposed his brother Umar in November 1853 and became Shehu of Borno.
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Original:  ` Abd ar-Rahman as seen by Heinrich Barth In 1851, a British expedition led by Heinrich Barth arrived in Borno.
Revised:  ' Abd ar-Rahman as seen by Heinrich Barth In 1851, a British expedition led by Heinrich Barth arrived in Borno.
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Original:  For Barth, ` Abd ar-Rahman was a
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Original: Bukar or Bukar Kura ( ca.1830-ca .1884) was Shehu of Borno from 1881 to ca.1884.
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Original: Bukar or Bukar Kura ( ca.1830-ca .1884) was Shehu of Borno from 1881 to ca.1884.
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Original: Ibrahim or Ibrahim Kura ( 1840s-ca.1885 ) was Shehu of Borno from ca.1884 to ca.1885.
Revised: Ibrahim or Ibrahim Kura ( 1840s-c. 1885 ) was Shehu of Borno from ca.1884 to ca.1885.
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Original: Ibrahim or Ibrahim Kura ( 1840s-ca.1885 ) was Shehu of Borno from ca.1884 to ca.1885.
Revised: Ibrahim or Ibrahim Kura ( 1840s-ca.1885 ) was Shehu of Borno from c. 1884 to c. 1885.
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Original: Rebellion Background  Rebellion The precise date of the start of the insurrection is unknown, but it occurred in early June 1915.
Revised:  Background Rebellion The precise date of the start of the insurrection is unknown, but it occurred in early June 1915.
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Original:  Suppression  The local British District Official, Hamilton-Brown, received news of the rebellion on 16 June.
Revised:  Suppression of the Rebellion The local British District Official, Hamilton-Brown, received news of the rebellion on 16 June.
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Original:  Suppression  The local British District Official, Hamilton-Brown, received news of the rebellion on 16 June.
Revised:  Suppression The local British District Official, Hamilton-Brown, received news of the rebellion on the 16th June.
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Original:  Despite the  Kamerun Campaign against the German Empire, the British were able to use a small force of soldiers which quickly suppressed the rebellion incurring no casualties.
Revised:  Despite the ongoing Kamerun Campaign against the German Empire, the British were able to use a small force of soldiers which quickly suppressed the rebellion incurring no casualties.
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Original: The Bussa rebellion, also known as the Boussa rebellion, was a small insurrection in the town of Bussa against the policy of indirect rule in British-controlled Nigeria in June 1915.
Revised: The Bussa rebellion, also known as the Boussa rebellion, was a small insurrection in the town of Bussa against the policy of indirect rule in British-ruled Nigeria in June 1915.
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Original:  The rebellion was triggered by  British deposition of the local Emir of Bussa, Kitoro Gani, and his replacement with a Native Administration.
Revised:  The rebellion was triggered by the British deposition of the local Emir of Bussa, Kitoro Gani, and his replacement with a Native Administration.
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Original:  Uprisings in British Nigeria and French Dahomey particularly served to "embarrass" colonialists and special precautions were taken to suppress them.
Revised:  Uprisings in British Nigeria and French Dahomey in particular served to "embarrass" colonialists and special precautions were taken to suppress them.
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Original:  Rebellions by the Egba people and the Iseyin caused particular concern.
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Original: 5|A Bussa warrior, photographed in around 1900 Bussa was located in Borgu province in the west of Northern Nigeria.
Revised: 5|A Bussa warrior, photographed in around 1900. Bussa was located in Borgu province in the west of Northern Nigeria.
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Original:  Traditionally, Bussa had been part of the Borgu Emirate but had been captured by the British and annexed into the Northern Nigeria Protectorate.
Revised:  Traditionally, Bussa had been part of the Borgu Emirate but had been conquered by the British and annexed into the Northern Nigeria Protectorate.
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Original:  The fighting with German forces in the Kamerun Campaign limited the forces which were at his disposal but Hamilton-Brown managed to levy a small force from the West African Frontier Force (WAFF) and the Nigeria police.
Revised:  The fighting with German forces in the Kamerun Campaign limited the forces which were at his disposal but Hamilton-Brown managed to levy a small force from the West African Frontier Force (WAFF) and the Nigerian police.
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Original: Context During World War I, the increased demands on the colonial state, combined with its growing shortage of manpower, put strain on British and French colonial holdings in West Africa.
Revised: Background During World War I, the increased demands on the colonial state, combined with its growing shortage of manpower, put strain on British and French colonial holdings in West Africa.
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Original: 5|A Bussa warrior, photographed in around 1900.
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Original:  Bussa was located in Borgu province in the west of Northern Nigeria.
Revised:  Bussa was located in Borgu Province, in the west of Northern Nigeria.
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Original:  Traditionally, Bussa had been part of the Borgu Emirate but had been conquered by the British and annexed into the Northern Nigeria Protectorate.
Revised:  Traditionally, Bussa had been part of the Borgu Emirate , but it had been conquered by the British and annexed into the Northern Nigeria Protectorate.
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Original:  Between 1912 and 1914, under the auspices of Frederick Lugard, Northern and Southern Nigeria were merged into a single Nigerian Protectorate . Lugard was a chief proponent of allowing limited self-determination to local states, known as indirect rule, based on traditional tribal groups but within the aegis of general British control.
Revised:  Between 1912 and 1914, under the auspices of Frederick Lugard, Northern and Southern Nigeria were merged into a single Nigerian protectorate . Lugard was a chief proponent of allowing limited self-determination to local states, known as indirect rule, based on traditional tribal groups but within the aegis of general British control.
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Original:  Lugard argued that , where possible, pre-colonial aristocrats or kings should be retained as indirect rulers in British service in order to give greater legitimacy to the system.
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Original:  Lugard argued that , where possible, pre-colonial aristocrats or kings should be retained as indirect rulers in British service in order to give greater legitimacy to the system.
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Original:  The hereditary Emir of Bussa, Kitoro Gani  was judged to be a weak ruler who did not have enough influence to collect taxes or fill quotas of labourers to work on building railways.
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Original:  The hereditary Emir of Bussa, Kitoro Gani  was judged to be a weak ruler who did not have enough influence to collect taxes or fill quotas of labourers to work on building railways.
Revised:  The hereditary Emir of Bussa, Kitoro Gani , was judged to be a weak ruler who did not have enough influence to collect taxes or fill quotas of labourers to work on building railways.
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Original:  In 1912, therefore, the Resident at Yelwa, A. C. Boyd, forced a major administrative reform on the Borgu Emirate which was divided up into administrative areas, each ruled by a "Beit-el-mal" or Native Administration.
Revised:  In 1912, therefore, the resident at Yelwa, A. C. Boyd, forced a major administrative reform on the Borgu Emirate which was divided up into administrative areas, each ruled by a "Beit-el-mal" or Native Administration.
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Original:  In 1912, therefore, the Resident at Yelwa, A. C. Boyd, forced a major administrative reform on the Borgu Emirate which was divided up into administrative areas, each ruled by a "Beit-el-mal" or Native Administration.
Revised:  In 1912, therefore, the Resident at Yelwa, A. C. Boyd, forced a major administrative reform on the Borgu Emirate which was divided up into administrative areas, each ruled by a beit-el-mal, or Native Administration.
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Original:  The two married on 1 January 2016 in Hong URL In November 2017, they had a daughter nicknamed Little Rice Bowl (小飯兜).
Revised:  The two married on 1 January 2016 in Hong Kong. In November 2017, they had a daughter nicknamed Little Rice Bowl (小飯兜).
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Original: Mounted events were held in many locations across America, but were particularly prevalent in the American Southwest .
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Original: Mounted events were held in many locations across America, but were particularly prevalent in the American Southwest .
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Original:  In September 1871, newspapers in a number of American states reprinted a report from the Boston Advertiser which detailed an on-foot potato race that had taken place in East Wilton, New Hampshire, with many remarking that such events were becoming fashionable.
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Original:  They were prominent in the American Southwest .
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Original: A potato race is one of several similar racing events where contestants compete to collect a number of potatoes as quickly as possible.
Revised: A potato race is one of several similar racing events where contestants compete collect a number of potatoes as quickly as possible.
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Original:   Potato races of both types were most popular  at community events such as county fairs, rodeos, picnics, and track and field meets from  the middle of the 19th century until approximately the 1930s.
Revised:  Potato races of both types were most popular in Australia, England, Scotland, the United States of America and Wales. Potato races were commonly held at community events such as county fairs, rodeos, picnics, and track and field meets from the middle of the 19th century until approximately the 1930s.
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Original:   Potato races of both types were most popular  at community events such as county fairs, rodeos, picnics, and track and field meets from  the middle of the 19th century until approximately the 1930s.
Revised:  Potato races of both types were most popular at community events such as county fairs, rodeos, picnics, and track and field meets from at least the middle of the 19th century until approximately the 1930s.
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Original:  Mounted  were particularly prevalent in the Southwestern United States.
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Original:  Writing in 1915, feminist theorist Charlotte Perkins Gilman described seeing a moving picture of a potato race on ice, and remarked on the notable difference between the performance of men and women, which she attributed to women's restrictive clothing .
Revised:  Writing in 1915, feminist theorist Charlotte Perkins Gilman described seeing a moving picture of a potato race on ice, and remarked on the notable difference between the performance of men and women, which she attributed to the restrictive clothing worn by women at the time .
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Original: [[File:Clive.jpg|Lord Clive meeting with Mir Jafar after the Battle of Plassey, by Francis Hayman (c. 1762) . ]] [[File:
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Original: Surrender of General Burgoyne.jpg|British general John Burgoyne shown surrendering at Saratoga (1777), Surrender of General Burgoyne painting by John Trumbull  1822]] The loss of the Thirteen Colonies, at the time Britain's most populous colonies, marked the transition between the "first" and "second" empires, in which Britain shifted its attention to Asia, the Pacific and later Africa.
Revised: Surrender of General Burgoyne.jpg|British general John Burgoyne shown surrendering at Saratoga (1777), Surrender of General Burgoyne painting by John Trumbull , 1822]] The loss of the Thirteen Colonies, at the time Britain's most populous colonies, marked the transition between the "first" and "second" empires, in which Britain shifted its attention to Asia, the Pacific and later Africa.
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Original:  Of this new state of Great Britain  the historian Simon Schama said: The Act of Union 1800 added the Kingdom of Ireland to create the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland.
Revised:  Of this new state of Great Britain , the historian Simon Schama said: The Act of Union 1800 added the Kingdom of Ireland to create the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland.
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Original:  Culturally  the Victorian era was a time of prosperity and dominant middle-class virtues when Britain dominated the world economy and maintained a generally peaceful century , 1815 – 1914.
Revised:  Culturally , the Victorian era was a time of prosperity and dominant middle-class virtues when Britain dominated the world economy and maintained a generally peaceful century , 1815 – 1914.
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Original:  Culturally  the Victorian era was a time of prosperity and dominant middle-class virtues when Britain dominated the world economy and maintained a generally peaceful century , 1815 – 1914.
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Original:  Culturally  the Victorian era was a time of prosperity and dominant middle-class virtues when Britain dominated the world economy and maintained a generally peaceful century , 1815 – 1914.
Revised:  Culturally the Victorian era was a time of prosperity and dominant middle-class virtues when Britain dominated the world economy and maintained a generally peaceful century , 1815 to 1914.
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Original:  Meanwhile, in 1945 – 1950  the Labour Party built a welfare state, nationalized many industries, and created the National Health Service.
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Original:  Meanwhile, in 1945 – 1950  the Labour Party built a welfare state, nationalized many industries, and created the National Health Service.
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Original:  Meanwhile, in 1945 – 1950  the Labour Party built a welfare state, nationalized many industries, and created the National Health Service.
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Original:  In the 1990s  neoliberalism led to the privatisation of nationalized industries and significant deregulation of business affairs.
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Original:  In the 1990s  neoliberalism led to the privatisation of nationalized industries and significant deregulation of business affairs.
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Original:  Since the 1990s  large-scale devolution movements in Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales have decentralized political decision-making.
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Original:  Since the 1990s  large-scale devolution movements in Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales have decentralized political decision-making.
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