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Original: Massachusetts Governor Deval Patrick has named former Democratic National Committee Chairman Paul Kirk to temporarily replace the late Edward  Kennedy in the US Senate.
Revised: Massachusetts Governor Deval Patrick has named former Democratic National Committee Chairman Paul Kirk to temporarily replace the late Edward "Ted" Kennedy in the US Senate.
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Original:    President Barack Obama released a statement saying, "I am pleased that Massachusetts will have its full representation in the United States Senate in the coming months, as important issues such as health care, financial reform and energy will be debated.
Revised:  Reaction President Barack Obama released a statement saying, "I am pleased that Massachusetts will have its full representation in the United States Senate in the coming months, as important issues such as health care, financial reform and energy will be debated.
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Original:  "He [Kennedy] often said that representing the people of Massachusetts in the Senate of the United States was the highest honour that he could possible imagine, and it is certainly nothing that I imagined, but it will be my highest honour, as well," Kirk said.
Revised:  "He [Kennedy] often said that representing the people of Massachusetts in the Senate of the United States was the highest honour that he could possibly imagine, and it is certainly nothing that I imagined, but it will be my highest honour, as well," Kirk said.
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Original:  Terry had been unemployedand in the hobby of metal-detecting for the last 18 years.
Revised:  Terry is unemployed, and has been in the hobby of metal-detecting for the last 18 years.
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Original:  Roughly 1,500 gold and silver pieces were found and the hoard contains roughly 5kgs of gold and 2.5kgs of silver , which is far more than the previous record of 2.5kgs of gold , which was found in a field in Woodbridge.
Revised:  Roughly 1,500 gold and silver pieces were found and the hoard contains roughly 5kgs of gold and 2.5kgs of silver — far more than the previous record of 2.5kgs of gold , which was found in a field in Woodbridge.
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Original:  Roughly 1,500 gold and silver pieces were found and the hoard contains roughly 5kgs of gold and 2.5kgs of silver , which is far more than the previous record of 2.5kgs of gold , which was found in a field in Woodbridge.
Revised:  Roughly 1,500 gold and silver pieces were found and the hoard contains roughly 5kgs of gold and 2.5kgs of silver , which is far more than the previous record of 2.5kgs of gold which was found in a field in Woodbridge.
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Original: The hoard, which was found in a private field over the course of five days in July 2009, is in fact the largest amount of Anglo-Saxon gold that has ever been unearthed  in the United Kingdom.
Revised: The hoard, which was found in a private field over the course of five days in July 2009, is in fact the most Anglo-Saxon gold that has ever been unearthed in the United Kingdom.
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Original: Euston Station cordoned off Amid the confusion surrounding todays London blasts, officials have urged the public to avoid the city if possible to allow emergency services to operate quicker.
Revised:  Amid the confusion surrounding todays London blasts, officials have urged the public to avoid the city if possible to allow emergency services to operate quicker.
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Original:   Update for 16:00 London Time: Bus services in Zone 1 have resumed .
Revised:  Update for 16:00 London Time: Bus services in Zone 1 have resumed 
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Original:  Ertuğrul Osman, the last surviving pretender to the Ottoman throne, died on Wednesday after a renal failure at the age of 97.
Revised: Flag of the Ottoman Empire Ertuğrul Osman, the last surviving pretender to the Ottoman throne, died on Wednesday after a renal failure at the age of 97.
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Original:  He had spent one week in hospital at the time of his death   
Revised:  He had spent one week in hospital at the time of his death . 
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Original:  The location of his death is a hospital in Istanbul .
Revised:  The location of his death is a hospital in .
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Original:  Osman was born on August 18, 1912 at Yıldız Palace in Istanbul, Ottoman Empire .
Revised:  Osman was born on August 18, 1912 at in Istanbul, Ottoman Empire .
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Original:  Osman was born on August 18, 1912 at Yıldız Palace in Istanbul, Ottoman Empire .
Revised:  Osman was born on August 18, 1912 at Yıldız Palace in Istanbul, .
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Original:  He was regarded by Turks as the "last Ottoman"  
Revised:  He was regarded by as the "last Ottoman" 
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Original:  He was regarded by Turks as the "last Ottoman"  
Revised:  He was regarded by Turks as the "last Ottoman" . 
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Original: Even 40 years ago, rock samples brought to Earth by Apollo (US) and other missions lead some scientists to claim that water existed on moon.
Revised: Even 40 years ago, rock samples brought to Earth by Apollo (US) and other missions led some scientists to claim that water existed on moon.
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Original:  Recent studies made by Chandrayaan have found water (H20) and Hydroxyl (OH) molecules with silicate rock at moon's equatorial region.
Revised:  Recent studies made by Chandrayaan have found water (H20) and hydroxyl (OH) molecules with silicate rock at moon's equatorial region.
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Original:  The safety car playing its unwitting part in the cheating Practice sessions for the 2009 Singapore Grand Prix were held today.
Revised:  The safety car on the track after the accident Practice sessions for the 2009 Singapore Grand Prix were held today.
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Original:  The safety car on the track after the accident Practice sessions for the 2009 Singapore Grand Prix were held today.
Revised:  The safety car on the track after the incident Practice sessions for the 2009 Singapore Grand Prix were held today.
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Original:  The move comes as Renault racer Romain Grosjean crashed into the same corner as the one Nelson Piquet Jr deliberatly hit to ensure victory for his teamate . Renault's main sponsor, Dutch bank ING, had already said it would not renew its three-year contract when it expires at the current season's end, but has now pulled out four races early.
Revised:  The move comes as Renault racer Romain Grosjean crashed into the same corner as the one Nelson Piquet Jr deliberately hit to ensure victory for his teamate . Renault's main sponsor, Dutch bank ING, had already said it would not renew its three-year contract when it expires at the current season's end, but has now pulled out four races early.
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Original:  Spanish insurers Mutua Madrileña echoed this sentiment, saying that moral issues, as well as the fact the manouvre was dangerous, reflected badly on sponsors.
Revised:  Spanish insurers Mutua Madrileña echoed this sentiment, saying that moral issues, as well as the fact the manoeuvre was dangerous, reflected badly on sponsors.
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Original:  At that meeting, Renault were given a two-year suspended sentence that will see them kicked out of the sport if they cheat again in that timeframe .
Revised:  At that meeting, Renault were given a two-year suspended sentence that will see them kicked out of the sport if they cheat again in that time-frame .
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Original:  Team boss Flavio Briatore was banned for life and engineer Pat Symonds  for five years for their roles .
Revised:  Team boss Flavio Briatore was banned for life and engineer Pat Symonds was banned for five years for their roles .
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Original:  Team boss Flavio Briatore was banned for life and engineer Pat Symonds  for five years for their roles .
Revised:  Team boss Flavio Briatore was banned for life and engineer Pat Symonds for five years due to their roles in the accident .
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Original:  These developments come days after the European Sponsorship Association said that cheating scandals jeapordised funding for teams in major competitions.
Revised:  These developments come days after the European Sponsorship Association said that cheating scandals jeopardised funding for teams in major competitions.
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Original:  "Sorry guys, I lost the car in turn 17," Grosjean announced over the team's radio, spinning out on the same corner as Piquet drove into a year ago to trigger the scandal , dubbed 'Crashgate' by the media.
Revised:  "Sorry guys, I lost the car in turn 17," Grosjean announced over the team's radio, spinning out on the same corner as Piquet drove into a year ago to trigger the scandal dubbed "Crashgate" by the media.
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Original:  A photograph of the car after Grosjean's accident did not reveal obvious major damage - although it did clearly show that the names of two sponsors have disappeared
Revised:  A photograph of the car after Grosjean's accident did not reveal obvious major damage , though it did clearly show that the names of two sponsors have disappeared
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Original:  CNN cites an unnamed U.S. government official as saying the U.S. was made aware of the facility at some point during the presidency of w: George W. Bush.
Revised:  CNN cites an unnamed U.S. government official as saying the U.S. was made aware of the facility at some point during the presidency of George W. Bush.
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Original: Iranian president Mahmoud Ahmadinejad has announced that the nation is near completion of a second , secret nuclear power facility.
Revised: The Iranian government has announced that the nation is near completion of a second , secret nuclear power facility.
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Original: Iranian president Mahmoud Ahmadinejad has announced that the nation is near completion of a second , secret nuclear power facility.
Revised: Iranian president Mahmoud Ahmadinejad has announced that the nation is near completion of a second nuclear power facility.
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Original:  In response,  Ahmadinejad said that the new plant was not a secret and that the International Atomic Energy Agency knew the plant existed.
Revised:  In response, the country's President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad said that the new plant was not a secret and that the International Atomic Energy Agency knew the plant existed.
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Original: To speed up the recount process, the United Nations-backed panel investigating the fraud allegations agreed to allow election officials to review  a portion of the votes from polling stations with suspected problems.
Revised: To speed up the recount process, the United Nations-backed panel investigating the fraud allegations agreed to allow election officials to review only a portion of the votes from polling stations with suspected problems.
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Original:  The two election commissions behind the elections decided to do only a partial recount in order to speed up the process, which is estimated to take about two weeks.
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Original:  We've got these international experts who have been doing this and who have advised that this is a good approach," said Grant Kippen  
Revised:  We've got these international experts who have been doing this and who have advised that this is a good approach," said Grant Kippen . 
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Original: Susan Atkins, a former member of the Manson clan and the US state of California's longest-serving female prisoner, has died in prison.
Revised: Susan Atkins, a former member of the Manson clan state of California's longest-serving female prisoner, has died in prison.
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Original: Ex-chief prosecutor Vincent Bugliosi said that she "had the most unfortunate background," of all the killers except Manson himself .
Revised: Ex-chief prosecutor Vincent Bugliosi said that she "had the most unfortunate background," of all the killers except Manson herself .
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Original: In recent years, Atkins had developed cancer which spread, almost totaly paralysing her.
Revised: In recent years, Atkins had developed cancer which spread, almost totally paralysing her.
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Original:  The crew were attempting a crash landing in a playing field after the  aircraft developed engine trouble    
Revised:  The crew were attempting a crash landing in a playing field after the aircraft developed engine trouble . 
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Original:  The crew were attempting a crash landing in a playing field after the Jetstream 41 aircraft developed engine trouble.
Revised:  The crew was attempting a crash landing in a playing field after the Jetstream 41 aircraft developed engine trouble.
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Original:  An investigation  has been launched 
Revised:  An investigation into the crash has been launched 
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Original:  It was not until June 2009, with the release of iPhone OS 3.0, that the iPhone also had the capability to send and receive these multimedia messages.
Revised:  It was not until June 2009, with the release of iPhone OS 3.0, that the devices also had the capability to send and receive these multimedia messages.
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Original:  The accident occurred near a church where a funeral was taking place for someone who had died in a road accident . Eight pupils had to be taken to hospital , as did one of the mourners who was also hurt .
Revised:  The accident occurred near a church where a funeral was taking place . Eight pupils had to be taken to hospital , as did one of the mourners who was also hurt .
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Original:  The accident occurred near a church where a funeral was taking place for someone who had died in a road accident . Eight pupils had to be taken to hospital , as did one of the mourners who was also hurt .
Revised:  The accident occurred near a church where a funeral was taking place for someone who had died in a road accident . Eight pupils had to be taken to hospital .
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Original:  He was on his way to a funeralof a person who had died in a road traffic accident.
Revised:  He was on his way to the funeral, which was for a person who had died in a road traffic accident.
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Original: The boys, who are aged 13-17 years old,  attacked the schoolgirl in Queen's Park close to Bolton town centre in the early hours of Thursday morning.
Revised: The boys, who are aged 13-17 years old, are alleged to have attacked the schoolgirl in Queen's Park close to Bolton town centre in the early hours of Thursday morning.
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Original:  The  offenders are due to appear in Bolton Magistrates Court later today 
Revised:  The alleged offenders are due to appear in Bolton Magistrates Court later today 
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Original:  The girl has been receiving couselling after the attack.
Revised:  The girl has been receiving counseling after the attack.
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Original:  Police were called at around 0100 BST on that day.
Revised:  Police were called at around 01.00 BST on that day.
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Original:  Forensics have examined the scene and a bench has been removed for further tests    
Revised:  Forensics have examined the scene and a bench has been removed for further tests . 
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Original:  They have all been remanded in custody.
Revised:  They have all been remaind in custody.
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Original:  They have all been remaind in custody.
Revised:  They have all been remained in custody.
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Original: A dust storm has hit Sydney, Australia for the second in the space of one week .
Revised: A dust storm has hit Sydney, Australia , the second such storm in a matter of days .
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Original:  This storm isn't thought to have caused any damage and was not quite as bad as  the one that struck the area on Wednesday .
Revised:  The new storm has not caused any damage and was not quite as bad as the one that struck the area on Wednesday .
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Original:  This storm isn't thought to have caused any damage and was not quite as bad as  the one that struck the area on Wednesday .
Revised:  This storm isn't thought to have caused any damage and was not as the one that struck the area on Wednesday .
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Original:  This storm isn't thought to have caused any damage and was not quite as bad as  the one that struck the area on Wednesday .
Revised:  This storm isn't thought to have caused any damage and was not quite as bad as the one that struck the area earlier in the week .
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Original:  Wednesday's storm, which stretched for 350 miles across the coast, could have been seen from space.
Revised:  Wednesday's storm, which stretched for 350 miles across the coast, could be seen from space.
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Original:  Sattelite pictures for Saturday's storm had shown a band of dust 125 miles (200 kilometres) wide, stretching from the central part of Australia towards the east coast, with visibility in the area reduced to just 500 metres.
Revised:  Satellite pictures taken during Saturday's storm had shown a band of dust 125 miles (200 kilometres) wide, stretching from the central part of Australia towards the east coast, with visibility in the area reduced to just 500 metres.
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Original:  Weather forecaster Barry Hanstrum said : " We 've got an area of widespread dust but not as thick as it was on Wednesday ," when referring to the dust storm on Wednesday.
Revised:  Weather forecaster Barry Hanstrum said , " We 've got an area of widespread dust but not as thick as it was on Wednesday ," when referring to the dust storm on Wednesday.
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Original:  Weather forecaster Barry Hanstrum said : " We 've got an area of widespread dust but not as thick as it was on Wednesday ," when referring to the dust storm on Wednesday.
Revised:  Weather forecaster Barry Hanstrum said : " we 've got an area of widespread dust but not as thick as it was on Wednesday ," when referring to the dust storm on Wednesday.
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Original:  The weather bureau for Australia said that dust storms were created by high-speed and wild winds, causing the dust to spread to Queensland and New South Wales  
Revised:  The weather bureau for Australia said that dust storms were created by high-speed and wild winds, causing the dust to spread to Queensland and New South Wales . 
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Original:  Wednesday's storm , which stretched for 350 miles across the coast , could be seen from space.
Revised:  Wednesday's storm , which stretched for 350 miles across the coast and could be seen from space.
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Original: People awoke to find the sky red and yellow after "a storm blew across the greater Sydney region at around 0400 - 0500 local time", said the New South Wales Department of Environment . Long droughts in Australia recently have made the soil very dry.
Revised: People awoke to find the sky red and yellow after "a storm blew across the greater Sydney region . According to the New South Wales Department of Environment . Long droughts in Australia recently have made the soil very dry.
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Original:  Reports say the drill will be conducted in several unknown locations and will last for several days  .
Revised:  Reports say the drill will be conducted in several unknown locations and will last for several days . The exercise also falls on the Jewish holiday of Yom Kippur .
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Original:  The team had to use sophisticated gas-filled separators to find these among the many other products of the collisions  
Revised:  The team had to use sophisticated gas-filled separators to find these among the many other products of the collisions . 
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Original: The elusive element was first detected in 1999 at the Joint Institute for Nuclear Research, Dubna, Russia, when a plutonium target was bombarded with calcium ions accelerated in a synchrotron .
Revised: The elusive element was first detected in 1998 at the Joint Institute for Nuclear Research, Dubna, Russia, when a plutonium target was bombarded with calcium ions accelerated in a synchrotron .
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Original: The elusive element was first detected in 1999 at the Joint Institute for Nuclear Research, Dubna, Russia, when a plutonium target was bombarded with calcium ions accelerated in a synchrotron .
Revised: The elusive element was first detected in 1999 at the Joint Institute for Nuclear Research, Dubna, Russia, when a plutonium target was bombarded with calcium ions accelerated in a cyclotron .
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Original: Scientists at Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory, California have confirmed the existence of the superheavy element 114, ten years after its first observation by Russian scientists.
Revised: Researchers at Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory, California have confirmed the existence of the superheavy element 114, ten years after its first observation by Russian scientists.
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Original: A petrol pump at a Tesco 's supermarket was filled with customers after a pump at a filling station dispensed fuel for a very low price .
Revised: A petrol pump at a Tesco supermarket became extremely popular with local customers due to an underpricing error .
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Original:  A Tesco supremarket.
Revised:  A Tesco supermarket.
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Original:  The supermarket filling pump in the village of Milton , near the town of Cambridge, England, starting dispensing fuel for  £ 0.40 ($0.64) a litre for six whole days.
Revised:  The supermarket filling pump in the village of Milton near Cambridge, England, starting dispensing fuel for £ 0.40 ($0.64) a litre for six whole days.
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Original:  Becuase of a fault, this meant that customers would be paying £20 ($32) for 50 litres of fuel for their vehicles instead of the usual  £ 54 ($86).
Revised:  Becuase of a fault, this meant that customers would be paying £20 ($32) for 50 litres of fuel instead of the usual £ 54 ($86).
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Original:  Becuase of a fault, this meant that customers would be paying £20 ($32) for 50 litres of fuel for their vehicles instead of the usual  £ 54 ($86).
Revised:  Becuase of a fault, this meant that customers would be paying £20 ($32) for 50 litres of fuel for their vehicles instead of the usual price, £ 54 ($86).
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Original:  Staff only became aware of the problem after hearing about it on local radio.
Revised:  Tesco staff only became aware of the problem after hearing about it on local radio.
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Original:  Tesco staff only became aware of the problem after hearing about it on local radio .
Revised:  It wasn't until the Tesco staff heard about it on local radio .
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Original:  Tesco staff only became aware of the problem after hearing about it on local radio .
Revised:  Tesco staff only became aware of the problem after hearing about it on the radio, did they become aware of problem .
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Original:  [[File:PakistanNorthWestFrontier.png|Northwest Pakistan ]] Shortly thereafter, in Peshawar's commercial district, another attacker exploded outside a bank affiliated with the Pakistani army, killing 10 people and wounding more than 70 others.
Revised:  [[File:PakistanNorthWestFrontier.png|Northwest Pakistan ]] Shortly thereafter, in Peshawar's commercial district, another attacker blew himself up outside a bank affiliated with the Pakistani army, killing 10 people and wounding more than 70 others.
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Original:  [[File:PakistanNorthWestFrontier.png|Northwest Pakistan ]] Shortly thereafter, in Peshawar's commercial district, another attacker exploded outside a bank affiliated with the Pakistani army, killing 10 people and wounding more than 70 others.
Revised:  [[File:PakistanNorthWestFrontier.png|Northwest Pakistan ]] Shortly thereafter, in Peshawar's commercial district, another attacker exploded outside a bank affiliated with the Pakistani army, killing ten people and wounding more than 70 others.
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