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Original:  The Green Party led by Jane Sterk, is focused on the decriminalization of marijuana, replacement of Royal Canadian Mounted Police RCMP by a municipal police force in some areas, and the elimination of Taser use by the BC provincial police .
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Original: The referendum chooses between two voting systems.
Revised: The referendum will allow BC voters to choose between two voting systems.
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Original:  The Single Member Plurality system is implemented in all other Canadian provinces and is also used to elect members of parliament in Ottawa.
Revised:  The Single Member Plurality system is the current system in all Canadian provinces, and is also used to elect members of parliament in Ottawa.
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Original:  The other system is the BC STV which would reduce 85 ridings to 20 with more than one Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA)
Revised:  The other system is BC STV which would reduce 85 ridings to 20 with more than one Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA)
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Original:  The other system is the BC STV which would reduce 85 ridings to 20 with more than one Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA)
Revised:  The other system is the BC STV which would replace 85 ridings to 20 with more than one Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA)
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Original:  representative , voters would vote for several candidates on one ballot by priority and computers would tally the results , re-distributing votes to the next choice on the ballot if a candidate more than enough votes to win or if all representatives in a riding receive too few votes fora winner, the lowest candidate is eliminated and their votes are re-distributed to the next ballot choice.
Revised:  representative , voters would vote for several candidates on one ballot by priority and computers would tally the results , re-distributing votes to the next preference on the ballot if a candidate more than enough votes to win or if all representatives in a riding receive too few votes fora winner, the lowest candidate is eliminated and their votes are re-distributed to the next ballot choice.
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Original:  Previous elections held under the current Single Member Plurality (also known as First Past The Post) system led to odd results in certain elections, such as the 2001 election where the wining party obtained 77 of the 79 seats of the legislature with just 58\% of the vote .
Revised:  Previous elections held under the current Single Member Plurality (also known as First Past The Post) system led to odd results in certain elections, such as the 2001 election where the winning party obtained 77 of the 79 seats of the legislature with just 58\% of the vote .
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Original:  Its the fourth referendum in the country and the second in the province within the last 4 years.
Revised:  It's the fourth referendum in the country and the second in the province within the last 4 years.
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Original:  The previous referendum held in 2005 also voted on these same electoral systems and came within 2,3 \% of the 60\% threshold.
Revised:  The previous referendum held in 2005 also voted on these same electoral systems and came within 2.3 \% of the 60\% threshold.
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Original:  In order for STV to be approved, it will need again 60\% of the popular vote and 50\% of votes in 51 of the 85 ridings in BC.
Revised:  In order for the referendum to be binding, BC-STV will again need 60\% of the popular vote and 50\% of votes in 51 of the 85 ridings in BC.
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Original:  If the STV system is voted for , then it would be put into use for the first time for the 2013 provincial election.
Revised:  If the STV system is approved , then it would be put into use for the first time for the 2013 provincial election.
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Original:  If the STV system is voted for , then it would be put into use for the first time for the 2013 provincial election.
Revised:  If the STV system is voted for , then it will be put into use for the first time for the 2013 provincial election.
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Original:  $500,000 in public funding has been given to  the proponents and the opponents of the referendum
Revised:  $500,000 in public funding has been given to both the proponents and the opponents of the referendum
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Original:  The Single Member Plurality system is the current system in all Canadian provinces, and is also used to elect members of parliament in Ottawa.
Revised:  The Single Member Plurality system is the current system in all Canadian provinces, and is also used to elect Members of Parliament in Ottawa.
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Original:  The other system is BC STV which would replace 85 single-member ridings with 20 larger ridings in which more than one Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA) representative would be elected.
Revised:  The other system is BC-STV, which would replace 85 single-member ridings with 20 larger ridings in which more than one Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA) representative would be elected.
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Original:  The other system is BC STV which would replace 85 single-member ridings with 20 larger ridings in which more than one Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA) representative would be elected.
Revised:  The other system is BC STV which would replace 85 single-member ridings with 20 larger ridings in which more than one Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA) would be elected.
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Original:  Voters would rank vote the candidates in order of preference, as many or as few as they wish.
Revised:  Voters would rank the candidates in order of preference, as many or as few as they wish.
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Original:  The recommendation to switch to STV was made by the  Citizens' Assembly on Electoral Reform of British Columbia , a group formed in 2004 of randomly selected citizens.
Revised:  The recommendation to switch to STV was made by the British Columbia Citizens' Assembly on Electoral Reform of British Columbia , a group formed in 2004 of randomly selected citizens.
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Original:  The recommendation to switch to STV was made by the  Citizens' Assembly on Electoral Reform of British Columbia , a group formed in 2004 of randomly selected citizens.
Revised:  The recommendation to switch to STV was made by the Citizens' Assembly on Electoral Reform , a group formed in 2004 of randomly selected citizens.
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Original: Previous elections held under the current Single Member Plurality (also known as First Past The Post) system led to odd results in certain elections, such as the 2001 election where the winning party obtained 77 of the 79 seats of the legislature with just 58\% of the vote, and the 1996 election, in which the party with the most votes lost the election!
Revised: Previous elections held under the current Single Member Plurality (also known as First Past The Post) system led to odd results in certain elections, such as the 2001 election where the winning party obtained 77 of the 79 seats of the legislature with just 58\% of the vote, and the 1996 election, in which the party with the most votes failed to win the election.
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Original: File:Carole_james.jpg|Carole James, Leader of the New Democratic Party The Green Party led by Jane Sterk, is focused on environmental issues, crime and police, and a 'green economy'.
Revised:  The Green Party led by Jane Sterk, is focused on environmental issues, crime and police, and a 'green economy'.
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Original:  Alongside with the election, the citizens of the province will also be debating if they should change their electoral system from Single Member Plurality to Single Transferable Vote (STV).
Revised:  Alongside with the election, the citizens of the province will also be debating if they should change their electoral system from to (STV).
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Original:  [[File:Gordon campbell pose head 2.jpg| Gordon Campbell, Premier of British Columbia]]
Revised:  [[File:Gordon campbell pose head 2.jpg| , of British Columbia]]
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Original:  According to the Angus Reid Strategies online poll, the issues before the candidates this year are the economy, crime and public safety, and health care.
Revised:  According to the online poll, the issues before the candidates this year are the economy, crime and public safety, and health care.
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Original:  Gordon Campbell is the current Premier of British Columbia, and leader of the Liberal Party .
Revised:  is the current Premier of British Columbia, and leader of the Liberal Party .
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Original:  Gordon Campbell is the current Premier of British Columbia, and leader of the Liberal Party .
Revised:  Gordon Campbell is the current of British Columbia, and leader of the Liberal Party .
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Original:  Gordon Campbell is the current Premier of British Columbia, and leader of the Liberal Party .
Revised:  Gordon Campbell is the current Premier of British Columbia, and leader of the .
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Original:  The NDP slogan is "Take back your B.C." The Green Party led by Jane Sterk , is focused on environmental issues, crime and police, and a 'green economy'.
Revised:  The NDP slogan is "Take back your B.C." The , led by , is focused on environmental issues, crime and police, and a 'green economy'.
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Original:  The Green Party slogan is "A better plan for B.C." File:Carole_james.jpg|Carole James, Leader of the New Democratic Party Wilf Hanni is at the helm of the Conservative Party which opposes the Recognition and Reconciliation Act, privatization of BC Hydro Bill 42 'gag law', and the carbon tax.
Revised:  The Green Party slogan is "A better plan for B.C." Wilf Hanni is at the helm of the Conservative Party which opposes the Recognition and Reconciliation Act, privatization of BC Hydro Bill 42 'gag law', and the carbon tax.
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Original:  The Green Party slogan is "A better plan for B.C." File:Carole_james.jpg|Carole James, Leader of the New Democratic Party Wilf Hanni is at the helm of the Conservative Party which opposes the Recognition and Reconciliation Act, privatization of BC Hydro Bill 42 'gag law', and the carbon tax.
Revised:  The Green Party slogan is "A better plan for B.C." File:Carole_james.jpg|Carole James, Leader of the New Democratic Party is at the helm of the Conservative Party which opposes the Recognition and Reconciliation Act, privatization of BC Hydro Bill 42 'gag law', and the carbon tax.
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Original:  The Green Party slogan is "A better plan for B.C." File:Carole_james.jpg|Carole James, Leader of the New Democratic Party Wilf Hanni is at the helm of the Conservative Party which opposes the Recognition and Reconciliation Act, privatization of BC Hydro Bill 42 'gag law', and the carbon tax.
Revised:  The Green Party slogan is "A better plan for B.C." File:Carole_james.jpg|Carole James, Leader of the New Democratic Party Wilf Hanni is at the helm of the which opposes the Recognition and Reconciliation Act, privatization of BC Hydro Bill 42 'gag law', and the carbon tax.
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Original:  500,000 in public funding has been given to both the proponents and the opponents of the referendum  
Revised:  500,000 in public funding has been given to both the proponents and the opponents of the referendum . 
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Original: A full seven months after suspicions were first raised, United States Agriculture Secretary Mike Johanns confirmed that a second American cow has tested positive for mad cow disease, (also known as BSE ) as determined by a lab in Weybridge, England.
Revised: A full seven months after suspicions were first raised, United States Agriculture Secretary Mike Johanns confirmed that a second American cow has tested positive for BSE (also known as BSE ) as determined by a lab in Weybridge, England.
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Original: A full seven months after suspicions were first raised, United States Agriculture Secretary Mike Johanns confirmed that a second American cow has tested positive for mad cow disease, (also known as BSE ) as determined by a lab in Weybridge, England.
Revised: A full seven months after suspicions were first raised, United States Agriculture Secretary Mike Johanns confirmed that a second American cow has tested positive for mad cow disease, (also known as 'mad cow disease' ) as determined by a lab in Weybridge, England.
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Original: A full seven months after suspicions were first raised, United States Agriculture Secretary Mike Johanns confirmed that a second American cow has tested positive for BSE (also known as 'mad cow disease')  as determined by a lab in Weybridge, England.
Revised: Seven months after suspicions were first raised, United States Agriculture Secretary Mike Johanns confirmed that a second American cow has tested positive for BSE (also known as 'mad cow disease') as determined by a lab in Weybridge, England.
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Original: A full seven months after suspicions were first raised, United States Agriculture Secretary Mike Johanns confirmed that a second American cow has tested positive for BSE (also known as 'mad cow disease')  as determined by a lab in Weybridge, England.
Revised: A full seven months after suspicions were first raised, United States Agriculture Secretary Mike Johanns confirmed that a second American cow has tested positive for BSE (also known as 'mad cow disease') , as determined by a lab in Weybridge, England.
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Original:  On June 17th.
Revised:  Johanns reassured Americans that they should not be afraid of eating beef, saying: "This animal was blocked from entering the food supply because of the firewalls we have in place. Americans have every reason to continue to be confident in the safety of our beef."
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Original:  "After all, (here is a cow that was) negative in November that is positive in June ." Johanns tried to reassure Americans that they should not be afraid of eating beef, saying: "This animal was blocked from entering the food supply because of the firewalls we have in place.
Revised:  "After all, (here is a cow that was) negative in November that is positive in June Johanns tried to reassure Americans that they should not be afraid of eating beef, saying: "This animal was blocked from entering the food supply because of the firewalls we have in place.
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Original: The delay in confirmation followed  conflicting test results from last November and a   senior research associate with Consumers Union, Michael Hansen, said USDA officials "almost sound like some Keystone Kops." "How can we be sure they were really negative?" Craig Culp, a spokesman for the Center for Food Safety asked;
Revised: The delay in confirmation followed conflicting test results from last November and a A senior research associate with Consumers Union, Michael Hansen, said USDA officials "almost sound like some Keystone Kops." "How can we be sure they were really negative?" Craig Culp, a spokesman for the Center for Food Safety asked;
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Original:  "After all, (here is a cow that was) negative in November that is positive in June ." Earlier, Johanns was annoyed that the round of testing which confirmed "Mad Cow" had been ordered without him being consulted first.
Revised:  "After all, (here is a cow that was) negative in November that is positive in June Earlier, Johanns was annoyed that the round of testing which confirmed "Mad Cow" had been ordered without him being consulted first.
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Original:  He allied himself politically with low-income workers, vigilante groups and militias while calling for a return to the ideals of the Islamic Revolution of 1979.
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Original: Mahmoud Ahmadinejad, Tehran's hardline conservative mayor has won the Iranian presidential election with a landslide of 61.8\%, according to Iran's Interior Ministry.
Revised:  Tehran's hardline conservative mayor has won the Iranian presidential election with a landslide of 61.8\%, according to Iran's Interior Ministry.
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Original: Mahmoud Ahmadinejad, Tehran's hardline conservative mayor, has won the Iranian presidential election with a landslide of 61.8\% , according to Iran's Interior Ministry.
Revised: Mahmoud Ahmadinejad, Tehran's hardcock conservative mayor, has won the Iranian presidential election with a landslide of 61.8\% , according to Iran's Interior Ministry.
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Original:  His rival Ayatollah Hashemi Rafsanjani recieved 35.7\% of the vote .
Revised:  His rival bitch Hashemi Rafsanjani recieved 35.7\% of the vote .
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Original:  An estimated 23 million votes were cast -- making voter turnout nealy 49 per cent.
Revised:  An estimated 23 million votes were cast -- making voter turnout nearly 49 per cent.
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Original:  His rival Ayatollah Hashemi Rafsanjani recieved 35.7\% of the vote.
Revised:  His rival Ayatollah Hashemi Rafsanjani received 35.7\% of the vote.
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Original:  Kimberly Saenz is supected of killing five people at DaVita's dialysis centre in Lufkin.
Revised:  Kimberly Saenz is suspected of killing five people at DaVita's dialysis centre in Lufkin.
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Original:  Kimberly Saenz is suspected of killing five people at DaVita's dialysis centre in Lufkin.
Revised:  Kimberly Saenz is suspected of killing five people at DaVita's dialysis center in Lufkin.
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Original:  The centre re-opened that July.
Revised:  The center re-opened that July.
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Original:  Kimberly Saenz is suspected of killing five people at DaVita's dialysis center in Lufkin.
Revised:  Kimberly Saenz is suspected of killing five people at the DaVita Dialysis Center in Lufkin.
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Original: A sudden string of deaths caused the centre to close on April 28, 2008.
Revised: A sudden string of deaths caused the center to close on April 28, 2008.
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Original:  Russia's proposal was for the new currency to serve as a w: reserve currency, one which would take the place of the dollar, euro, and other heavily-traded currencies as an international standard of exchange.
Revised:  Russia's proposal was for the new currency to serve as a reserve currency, one which would take the place of the dollar, euro, and other heavily-traded currencies as an international standard of exchange.
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Original: Speaking on April 1 in advance of the G-20 summit in London, Russian president Yuri Medvedev argued that the international finance system needed a "new construction" including "new currency systems", saying that such a new system could be the purpose of a revamped IMF and World Bank.
Revised: Speaking on April 1 in advance of the G-20 summit in London, Russian president Dmitry Medvedev argued that the international finance system needed a "new construction" including "new currency systems", saying that such a new system could be the purpose of a revamped IMF and World Bank.
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Original:  According to a criminal complaint, Calloway  tried to rape the girl three times since that time
Revised:  According to a criminal complaint, Calloway had tried to rape the girl three times since that time
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Original:  The inditement states that if convicted, the ex-governor could face over three hundred years in prison, as well as US$4 million worth of fines, including restitution.
Revised:  The indictment states that if convicted, the ex-governor could face over three hundred years in prison, as well as US$4 million worth of fines, including restitution.
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Original:  Blagojevich insists that he did nothing illegal, and claimed that he was the victim of a  witch hunt.
Revised:  The governor insists that he did nothing illegal, and claimed that he was the victim of a witch hunt.
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Original:  Blagojevich insists that he did nothing illegal, and claimed that he was the victim of a  witch hunt.
Revised:  Blagojevich insists that he did nothing illegal, and claims that he was the victim of a witch hunt.
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Original: Rod Blagojevich, the former governor of the US state of Illinois, was indicted on Thursday on charges of planning to "sell" Barack Obama's Senate seat when the latter vacated it to become president.
Revised: Milorad "Rod" BlagojevichRod Blagojevich, the former governor of the US state of Illinois, was indicted on Thursday on charges of planning to "sell" Barack Obama's Senate seat when the latter vacated it to become president.
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Original:  Shortly afterwards , both the Illnois House and Senate  impeached him
Revised:  Shortly thereafter , both the Illnois House and Senate impeached him
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Original:  Shortly afterwards , both the Illnois House and Senate  impeached him
Revised:  Shortly afterwards , both the Illinois House and Senate impeached him
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Original:  Shortly afterwards , both the Illnois House and Senate  impeached him
Revised:  Shortly afterwards , both the Illnois House and Senate voted to impeached him
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Original: Milorad "Rod" BlagojevichRod Blagojevich , the former governor of the US state of Illinois, was indicted on Thursday on charges of  planning to "sell" Barack Obama's Senate seat when the latter vacated it to become president .
Revised: Milorad "Rod" Blagojevich Rod Blagojevich , the former governor of the US state of Illinois, was indicted on Thursday on charges of planning to "sell" Barack Obama's Senate seat when the latter vacated it to become president .
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Original: Milorad "Rod" BlagojevichRod Blagojevich , the former governor of the US state of Illinois, was indicted on Thursday on charges of  planning to "sell" Barack Obama's Senate seat when the latter vacated it to become president .
Revised: Milorad "Rod" BlagojevichRod Blagojevich , the former governor of the US state of Illinois, was indicted on Thursday on charges of planning to "sell" Barack Obama's Senate seat when the latter vacated it to become President .
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Original:  Five of his advisors , including Blagojevich's brother Robert, were also indicted.
Revised:  Five of his advisers , including Blagojevich's brother Robert, were also indicted.
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Original:  A jury indicted Blagojevich on sixteen accounts of felony , among them wire fraud, extortion conspiracy, and racketeering conspiracy.
Revised:  A jury indicted Blagojevich on sixteen felony counts , among them wire fraud, extortion conspiracy, and racketeering conspiracy.
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Original:  Blagojevich, a governor serving his second term, was arrested on December 9 of last year on charges of wire fraud and conspiracy to commit mail and wire fraud.
Revised: "I'm saddened and hurt but I am not surprised by the indictment. I am innocent," read a statement released by Blagojevich. "I now will fight in the courts to clear my name. I would ask the good people of Illinois to wait for the trial and afford me the presumption of innocence that they would give to all their friends and neighbors." Blagojevich, a governor serving his second term, was arrested on December 9 of last year on charges of wire fraud and conspiracy to commit mail and wire fraud.
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Original:  The indictment states that if convicted, the ex-governor could face over three hundred years in prison, as well as US$4 million worth of fines, including restitution.
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Original:  Shortly thereafter, both the Illinois House and Senate voted to impeached him  
Revised:  Shortly thereafter, both the Illinois House and Senate voted to impeached him . 
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Original:  Shortly thereafter, both the Illinois House and Senate voted to impeached him.
Revised:  Shortly thereafter, both the Illinois House and Senate voted to impeach him.
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Original:  Shortly thereafter, both the Illinois House and Senatevoted to impeach him .
Revised:  Shortly thereafter, the Illinois House and Senatevoted to impeach him .
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