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Original: Constitution Day will end with Norway's new national hero Rybak, deemed "Alexander the Great" in the Norwegian newspapers, arriving at Oslo's Gardermoen airport at 11 p.m. local time ( 2100 UTC).
Revised: Constitution Day will end with Norway's new national hero Rybak, deemed "Alexander the Great" in the Norwegian newspapers, arriving at Oslo's Gardermoen airport at 11 p.m. local time ( 1925 UTC).
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Original:  Norway's neighbor Sweden was especially happy for Constitution Day, where Norwegian-Swedes dressed in folk costumes and held up copies of the newspaper Expressen, who deemed Norway's winning Eurovision song "the best winner since ABBA" and published a large headline in Norwegian, stating "We look forward with you."
Revised:  Norway's neighbor Sweden was especially happy on Constitution Day, where Norwegian-Swedes dressed in folk costumes and held up copies of the newspaper Expressen, who deemed Norway's winning Eurovision song "the best winner since ABBA" and published a large headline in Norwegian, stating "We look forward with you."
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Original:  Rybak, in Moscow, sang a well-known national song, "Sønner av Norge" (Sons of Norway), to a large fan crowd.
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Original: Witness reports state that the al-Shabab rebels took the town after two hours of fighting on Sunday.
Revised: Witness reports state that the Al-Shabaab rebels took the town after two hours of fighting on Sunday.
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Original:   Meanwhile, in Mogadishu, fighting between government forces and al-Shabab has left at least 28 people dead in the past two days.
Revised:  Meanwhile, in Mogadishu, fighting between government forces and Al-Shabaab has left at least 28 people dead in the past two days.
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Original:  The Somali government has started to lose ground against al-Shabab in the past few weeks.
Revised:  The Somali government has started to lose ground against Al-Shabaab in the past few weeks.
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Original: Eywitness reports say that Islamist insurgents in Somalia have captured the town of Jowhar, a strategically important city 90 kilometres north of the country's capital of Mogadishu.
Revised: Eyewitness reports say that Islamist insurgents in Somalia have captured the town of Jowhar, a strategically important city 90 kilometres north of the country's capital of Mogadishu.
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Original:  The United Nations Security Council has said that it expresses "concern at the loss of life and the worsening humanitarian situation arising out of the renewed fighting".
Revised:  The United Nations Security Council has expressed "concern at the loss of life and the worsening humanitarian situation arising out of the renewed fighting".
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Original:  Currently, it does not control much area outside of the capital , reinforced by African Union troops
Revised:  Currently, it does not control much area outside of the capital which is reinforced by African Union troops
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Original: Sudan accused Chad on Friday of launching a pair of airstrikes sixty kilometres into Sudanese territory.
Revised: Sudan accused Chad on Friday of launching a pair of airstrikes into Sudanese territory.
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Original:  The march was lead by the chairman of the opposition Democratic Progressive party, Tsai Ign-wen . China claims sovereignty over the island nation, which split from the former when the 1949 Chinese civil war ended . China has said numerous times that it will regain rule over Taiwan, even if it means using force
Revised:  The march was lead by the chairman of the opposition Democratic Progressive Party, Tsai Ing-wen . China claims sovereignty over the island nation, which split from the former when the 1949 Chinese civil war ended . China has said numerous times that it will regain rule over Taiwan, even if it means using force
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Original:  The march was lead by the chairman of the opposition Democratic Progressive party, Tsai Ign-wen . China claims sovereignty over the island nation, which split from the former when the 1949 Chinese civil war ended . China has said numerous times that it will regain rule over Taiwan, even if it means using force
Revised:  The march was lead by the chairman of the opposition Democratic Progressive party, Tsai Ign-wen . China claims sovereignty over the island nation, which split from the former when the Chinese Civil War ended in 1949. China has said numerous times that it will regain rule over Taiwan, even if it means using force
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Original: The march comes several days before the anniversary of president's appointment, which is due on Wednesday.
Revised: The march comes a few days before the anniversary of president's appointment, which is due on Wednesday.
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Original:  President Ma has pledged he will abandon the anti-Chinese policies held by his predecessors, a move the opposition claims weakens the sovereignty of Taiwan .
Revised:  The opposition claims that Ma will weaken the sovereignty of Taiwan, if he follows through on his pledge to abandon the anti-Chinese policies held by his predecessors, a move the opposition claims weakens the sovereignty of Taiwan .
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Original:  President Ma has pledged he will abandon the anti-Chinese policies held by his predecessors, a move the opposition claims weakens the sovereignty of Taiwan .
Revised:  President Ma has pledged he will abandon the anti-Chinese policies of his predecessors .
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Original: Dalia  Grybauskaite, the budget commissioner for the European Union, has claimed victory in the Lithuanian presidential elections.
Revised: Dalia GrybauskaiteDalia Grybauskaite, the budget commissioner for the European Union, has claimed victory in the Lithuanian presidential elections.
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Original: 25px The German newspaper Express commented on Albania's entry "Carry Me Into Your Dreams" with this description: "The singer looked like a Barbie from the '80s, long blonde hair and a pink dress with frills....what the mint-colored Spiderman covered with sequins [did] behind her, nobody could explain." Ralf Dorschel in the newspaper Hamburger Morgenpost described Malena Ernman from Sweden as "the queen of the night on speed, a nightmare.
Revised: 25px The German newspaper Express commented on Albania's entry "Carry Me In Your Dreams" with this description: "The singer looked like a Barbie from the '80s, long blonde hair and a pink dress with frills....what the mint-colored Spiderman covered with sequins [did] behind her, nobody could explain." Ralf Dorschel in the newspaper Hamburger Morgenpost described Malena Ernman from Sweden as "the queen of the night on speed, a nightmare.
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Original: Norway's mass media was filled with stories revolving around the winner, Alexander Rybak, but a secondary story that received press coverage was outcry against NRK's Eurovision commentator, Synnøve Svabø, who was criticized for talking incessantly during the event, making leering comments regarding the contents inside the male entrants' tight pants, and making a joke about  stuffing sweatsocks in her bra.
Revised: Norway's mass media was filled with stories revolving around the winner, Alexander Rybak, but a secondary story that received press coverage was outcry against NRK's Eurovision commentator, Synnøve Svabø, who was criticized for talking incessantly during the event, making leering comments regarding the contents inside the male entrants' tight pants, and making a joke about a female contestant supposedly stuffing sweatsocks in her bra.
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Original: Norway's mass media was filled with stories revolving around the winner, Alexander Rybak, but a secondary story that received press coverage was outcry against NRK's Eurovision commentator, Synnøve Svabø, who was criticized for talking incessantly during the event, making leering comments regarding the contents inside the male entrants' tight pants, and making a joke about a female contestant supposedly stuffing sweatsocks in her  bra.
Revised: Norway's mass media was filled with stories revolving around the winner, Alexander Rybak, but a secondary story that received press coverage was outcry against NRK's Eurovision commentator, Synnøve Svabø, who was criticized for talking incessantly during the event, making leering comments regarding the contents inside the male entrants' tight pants, and making a joke about stuffing sweatsocks in her bra.
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Original: Norway's mass media was filled with stories revolving around the winner, Alexander Rybak, but a secondary story that received press coverage was outcry against NRK's Eurovision commentator, Synnøve Svabø, who was criticized for talking incessantly during the event, making leering comments regarding the contents inside the male entrants' tight pants, and making a joke about a female contestant supposedly stuffing sweatsocks in her  bra.
Revised: Norway's mass media was filled with stories revolving around the winner, Alexander Rybak, but a secondary story that received press coverage was outcry against NRK's Eurovision commentator, Synnøve Svabø, who was criticized for talking incessantly during the event, making leering comments regarding the contents inside the male entrants' tight pants, and making a joke about a female contestant supposedly stuffing sweatsocks in her own bra.
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Original:  Most national newspapers congratulate their entrants on a job well done, while others trash-talked other entrants, and still others called for their countries to pull out of the Contest.
Revised:  Most national newspapers congratulated their entrants on a job well done, while others trash-talked other entrants, and still others called for their countries to pull out of the Contest.
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Original:  A pandemic describes the geographic spread rather than its severity and it's very important that that is reflected in your ability to move to phase six," he said  
Revised:  A pandemic describes the geographic spread rather than its severity and it's very important that that is reflected in your ability to move to phase six," he said . 
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Original:  A pandemic describes the geographic spread rather than its severity and it's very important that that is reflected in your ability to move to phase six," he said . Related new
Revised:  A pandemic describes the geographic spread rather than its severity and it's very important that that is reflected in your ability to move to phase six," he said Related new
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Original:  A pandemic describes the geographic spread rather than its severity and it's very important that that is reflected in your ability to move to phase six," he said . Related new
Revised:  A pandemic describes the geographic spread rather than its severity and it's very important that that is reflected in your ability to move to phase six," he said . 
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Original: Margaret ChanThe H1N1 swine flu has now spread throughout the globe, with the World Health Organisation reporting that 8,829 confirmed cases have been reported in forty countries, most of them in Mexico and the United States.
Revised: Margaret ChanThe H1N1 swine flu has now spread throughout the globe, with the World Health Organisation reports that there are 8,829 confirmed cases have been reported in forty countries, most of them in Mexico and the United States.
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Original: Margaret ChanThe H1N1 swine flu has now spread throughout the globe, with the World Health Organisation reporting that 8,829 confirmed cases have been reported in forty countries, most of them in Mexico and the United States.
Revised: Margaret ChanThe H1N1 swine flu has now spread throughout the globe, with the World Health Organisation reporting that 8,829 confirmed cases in forty countries, most of them in Mexico and the United States.
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Original:  Many countries, among them China, Japan, and the United Kingdom, have warned the WHO to be cautious about declaring a global pandemic , saying that such an announcement, if delivered prematurely, could cause mass panic and confusion.
Revised:  Many countries, among them China, Japan, and the United Kingdom, have warned the WHO to be cautious about declaring a global pandemic . They say that such an announcement, if delivered prematurely, could cause mass panic and confusion.
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Original: UK health secretary, Alan Johnson , said the organisation needs to have more flexibility in its pandemic alert levels to take into consideration how severe the virus is.
Revised: UK Secretary of Health Alan Johnson said the organisation needs to have more flexibility in its pandemic alert levels to take into consideration how severe the virus is.
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Original:  With the onset of World War II, a Jew in the occupied France, Daniel Carasso emigrated to the United States to build the new company - Dannon.
Revised:  With the onset of World War II, a Jew in occupied France, Daniel Carasso emigrated to the United States to build the new company - Dannon.
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Original:  With the onset of World War II, a Jew in the occupied France, Daniel Carasso emigrated to the United States to build the new company - Dannon.
Revised:  With the onset of World War II, a Jew in the occupied France, Daniel Carasso emigrated to the United States to build a new company — Dannon.
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Original:  He would return to Europe after the end of the war and joined his first company back in 1951.
Revised:  He would return to Europe after the end of the war and joined his first company in 1951.
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Original:  Both companies later teamed up.
Revised:  The companies later teamed up.
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Original:  He then inspirated the merger with Gervais company in 1967 and with Antoine Riboud's BSN Group in 1972 - a major step to the internationalization of the Group .
Revised:  He then inspirited the merger with Gervais company in 1967 and with Antoine Riboud's BSN Group in 1972 - a major step to the internationalization of the Group .
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Original:  He then inspirated the merger with Gervais company in 1967 and with Antoine Riboud's BSN Group in 1972 - a major step to the internationalization of the Group .
Revised:  He then inspirated the merger with Gervais company in 1967 and with Antoine Riboud's BSN Group in 1972 — a major step to the internationalization of the Group .
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Original:  He then inspirated the merger with Gervais company in 1967 and with Antoine Riboud's BSN Group in 1972 - a major step to the internationalization of the Group .
Revised:  He then inspirated the merger with Gervais company in 1967 and with Antoine Riboud's BSN Group in 1972 - a major step in the internationalization of the Group .
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Original:  He then inspirated the merger with Gervais company in 1967 and with Antoine Riboud's BSN Group in 1972 - a major step to the internationalization of the Group .
Revised:  He then inspirated the merger with Gervais company in 1967 and with Antoine Riboud's BSN Group in 1972 - a major step to the internationalization of the group .
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Original:  He was involved in the company-related activities to the very end of his life, including the recent 90th anniversary of the Danone's brand name.
Revised:  He was involved in company-related activities to the very end of his life, including the recent 90th anniversary of the Danone's brand name.
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Original:  He was involved in the company-related activities to the very end of his life, including the recent 90th anniversary of the Danone's brand name.
Revised:  He was involved in the company-related activities until the very end of his life, including the recent 90th anniversary of the Danone's brand name.
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Original:  Danon is a diminutive form for Daniel in Catalan.
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Original:  Today Danone is a world-wide producer of fruity and nutty yogurts, mousses, cream desserts, fromage frais and various dairy specialities, all claimed to have healthy benefits.
Revised:  Today, Danone is a world-wide producer of fruity and nutty yogurts, mousses, cream desserts, fromage frais and various dairy specialities, all claimed to have healthy benefits.
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Original: Logo of Groupe Danone Daniel Carasso, for whom his father, Isaac Carasso  named the famous yoghurt producer Danone in 1919 in Spain, died on Sunday aged 103.
Revised: Logo of Groupe Danone Daniel Carasso, for whom his father, Isaac Carasso , named the famous yoghurt producer Danone in 1919 in Spain, died on Sunday aged 103.
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Original: Logo of Groupe Danone Daniel Carasso, for whom his father, Isaac Carasso  named the famous yoghurt producer Danone in 1919 in Spain, died on Sunday aged 103.
Revised: Logo of Groupe Danone Daniel Carasso, for whom his father, Isaac Carasso named the famous yoghurt-producer Danone in 1919 in Spain, died on Sunday aged 103.
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Original:  Danon is a diminutive form for Daniel in Catalan.
Revised:  "Danon" is a diminutive form for Daniel in Catalan.
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Original:  Danon is a diminutive form for Daniel in Catalan.
Revised:  Danon is a diminutive form for "Daniel" in Catalan.
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Original:  With the onset of World War II, Daniel Carasso, a Sephardic Jew in occupied France, emigrated to the United States to build a new company — Dannon.
Revised:  Later, with the onset of World War II, Daniel Carasso, a Sephardic Jew in occupied France, emigrated to the United States to build a new company — Dannon.
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Original:  He would return to Europe after the end of the war and joined his first company in 1951.
Revised:  He returned to Europe after the end of the war and joined his first company in 1951.
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Original:  He would return to Europe after the end of the war and joined his first company in 1951.
Revised:  He would return to Europe after the end of the war and rejoined his first company in 1951.
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Original: David Miliband, the British Foreign Minister , then took questions, and noted the House would give tributes at a later date, as the Speaker said he had nothing else to say on the subject.
Revised: David Miliband, the British Foreign Secretary , then took questions, and noted the House would give tributes at a later date, as the Speaker said he had nothing else to say on the subject.
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Original: The Speaker of the British House of Commons , the Right Honourable Michael Martin MP, told Parliament that he will "relinquish the office of Speaker on Sunday, 21st June".
Revised: The of the British House of Commons , the Right Honourable Michael Martin MP, told Parliament that he will "relinquish the office of Speaker on Sunday, 21st June".
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Original: The Speaker of the British House of Commons , the Right Honourable Michael Martin MP, told Parliament that he will "relinquish the office of Speaker on Sunday, 21st June".
Revised: The Speaker of the British , the Right Honourable Michael Martin MP, told Parliament that he will "relinquish the office of Speaker on Sunday, 21st June".
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Original: The Speaker of the British House of Commons , the Right Honourable Michael Martin MP, told Parliament that he will "relinquish the office of Speaker on Sunday, 21st June".
Revised: The Speaker of the British House of Commons , the Right Honourable MP, told Parliament that he will "relinquish the office of Speaker on Sunday, 21st June".
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Original:  He will also step down as the Member of Parliament for Glasgow North East , which will cause a by-election.
Revised:  He will also step down as the Member of Parliament for , which will cause a by-election.
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Original:  Bob Spink, Independant MP for Castle Point , however, gave the Speaker "the warmest possible tribute," a sentiment shared by other members who cried "hear hear."
Revised:  Bob Spink, Independant MP for , however, gave the Speaker "the warmest possible tribute," a sentiment shared by other members who cried "hear hear."
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Original:  On the other hand, Nick Robinson , political editor for the BBC, said on his blog that "in the end, he had no choice" but to resign and claimed "he failed to see this crisis coming."
Revised:  On the other hand, , political editor for the BBC, said on his blog that "in the end, he had no choice" but to resign and claimed "he failed to see this crisis coming."
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Original:  This is the first time since 1695 that a Speaker has been effectively forced out of office, when Sir John Trevor was found guilty of accepting a bribe  
Revised:  This is the first time since 1695 that a Speaker has been effectively forced out of office, when was found guilty of accepting a bribe 
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Original:  This is the first time since 1695 that a Speaker has been effectively forced out of office, when Sir John Trevor was found guilty of accepting a bribe  
Revised:  This is the first time since 1695 that a Speaker has been effectively forced out of office, when Sir John Trevor was found guilty of accepting a bribe . 
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Original:  There are 3,900 voting stations  set up throughout the country.
Revised:  3,900 voting stations set up throughout the country.
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Original:  There are 3,900 voting stations  set up throughout the country.
Revised:  There are 3,900 voting stations were set up throughout the country.
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Original:  Polls opened at 6.00 am local time, and are to be closed at 18.00.
Revised:  Polls opened at 6.00 am local time, and closed at 18.00.
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Original:  Bingu, the incumbent, won the last presidential elections , held in 2004, having obtained 36\% of the vote
Revised:  Bingu, the incumbent, won the 2004 presidential elections with 36\% of the vote
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Original: This team was then informed by Turkish Coronersthat thirty of the bodies were so badly maimed that visual identification was impossible and DNA tests would be required to identify these victims.
Revised: This team was then informed by Turkish Coroners that thirty of the bodies were so badly maimed that visual identification was impossible and DNA tests would be required to identify these victims.
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Original: This team was then informed by Turkish Coroners that thirty of the bodies were so badly maimed that visual identification was impossible and DNA tests would be required to identify these victims.
Revised: This team was then informed by Turkish coroners that thirty of the bodies were so badly maimed that visual identification was impossible and DNA tests would be required to identify these victims.
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Original: One of the most popular Russian theatrical and cinema actor Oleg Yankovskydies at 65 on Wednesday.
Revised: One of the most popular Russian theatrical and cinema actors, Oleg Yankovsky, died at the age of 65 on Wednesday.
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Original:   He starred in more than 60 (check!) filmsincluding such as Two Comrades Were Serving, The Kreutzer Sonata, An Ordinary Miracle and The Very Same Munchhausen.
Revised:  He starred in more than 60 films, including Two Comrades Were Serving, The Kreutzer Sonata, An Ordinary Miracle and The Very Same Munchhausen.
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Original:  He died in Moscow after nearly life-long struggle with pancreatic cancer.
Revised:  He 
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Original:  He left behind his widow, an actress Lyudmila Zorina  and his son Philip, who is also an actor and a film director.
Revised:  left behind his widow, an actress Lyudmila Zorina and his son Philip, who is also an actor and a film director.
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Original:  He left behind his widow, an actress Lyudmila Zorina  and his son Philip, who is also an actor and a film director.
Revised:  He left behind his widow, an actress Lyudmila Zorina , and his son Philip, who is also an actor and a film director.
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