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Original:  Albert consulted regularly with Menahem Golan at Cannon Films on how to market and pre-sell Cannon's films, and successfully launched the foreign campaigns for Death Wish 2, New Year's Evil, Lady Chatterly's Lover,  Enter the Ninja , and many others.
Revised:  Albert consulted regularly with Menahem Golan at Cannon Films on how to market and pre-sell Cannon's films, and successfully started the foreign campaigns for Death Wish 2, New Year's Evil, Lady Chatterly's Lover, Enter the Ninja , and many others.
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Original:  Albert consulted regularly with Menahem Golan at Cannon Films on how to market and pre-sell Cannon's films, and successfully launched the foreign campaigns for Death Wish 2, New Year's Evil, Lady Chatterly's Lover,  Enter the Ninja , and many others.
Revised:  Albert consulted regularly with Menahem Golan at Cannon Films on how to market and pre-sell Cannon's films, and successfully launched the foreign campaigns for Death Wish 2, New Year's Evil, Lady Chatterly's Lover, and Enter the Ninja , and many others.
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Original:  Later, when Golan started 21st Century Films, he collaborated with Albert, who produced though his Sawmill Entertainment Corp. the Lambada dance movie The Forbidden Dance for Golan's foreign distribution , and Columbia Pictures' U.S. theatrical release.
Revised:  Later, when Golan started 21st Century Films, he collaborated with Albert, who produced though his Sawmill Entertainment Corp. the Lambada dance movie The Forbidden Dance for Golan's foreign distribution and Columbia Pictures' U.S. theatrical release.
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Original:  Albert hunt ed down the management for the band Kaoma when they were touring in the United States , and licensed their hit song "Lambada" for the film.
Revised:  Albert found the management for the band Kaoma when they were touring in the United States , and licensed their hit song "Lambada" for the film.
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Original:  Albert hunt ed down the management for the band Kaoma when they were touring in the United States , and licensed their hit song "Lambada" for the film.
Revised:  Albert hunt ed down the management for the band Kaoma when they were touring in the United States and licensed their hit song "Lambada" for the film.
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Original:  He also tried to book the band to appear in the movie, however the band's schedule did not fit with the fast production schedule, so he hired Kid Creole and the Coconuts to perform in the final scenes.
Revised:  He also tried to book the band to appear in the movie, but the band's schedule did not fit with the fast production schedule, so he hired Kid Creole and the Coconuts to perform in the final scenes.
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Original:  Albert worked closely with Film Ventures International between 1978 through the 1980s  creating advertising campaigns for the theatrical release of their expoitation films, including Kill or Be Killed, They Call Me Bruce, The House on Sorority Row, Breaker, Breaker, Great White, Mortuary, and Pieces.
Revised:  Albert worked with Film Ventures International between 1978 through the 1980s creating advertising campaigns for the theatrical release of their expoitation films, including Kill or Be Killed, They Call Me Bruce, The House on Sorority Row, Breaker, Breaker, Great White, Mortuary, and Pieces.
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Original:  Albert worked closely with Film Ventures International between 1978 through the 1980s  creating advertising campaigns for the theatrical release of their expoitation films, including Kill or Be Killed, They Call Me Bruce, The House on Sorority Row, Breaker, Breaker, Great White, Mortuary, and Pieces.
Revised:  Albert worked closely with Film Ventures International from 1978 through the 1980s creating advertising campaigns for the theatrical release of their expoitation films, including Kill or Be Killed, They Call Me Bruce, The House on Sorority Row, Breaker, Breaker, Great White, Mortuary, and Pieces.
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Original:  Albert worked closely with Film Ventures International between 1978 through the 1980s  creating advertising campaigns for the theatrical release of their expoitation films, including Kill or Be Killed, They Call Me Bruce, The House on Sorority Row, Breaker, Breaker, Great White, Mortuary, and Pieces.
Revised:  Albert worked closely with Film Ventures International between 1978 through the 1980s , creating advertising campaigns for the theatrical release of their expoitation films, including Kill or Be Killed, They Call Me Bruce, The House on Sorority Row, Breaker, Breaker, Great White, Mortuary, and Pieces.
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Original:  Albert worked closely with Film Ventures International between 1978 through the 1980s  creating advertising campaigns for the theatrical release of their expoitation films, including Kill or Be Killed, They Call Me Bruce, The House on Sorority Row, Breaker, Breaker, Great White, Mortuary, and Pieces.
Revised:  Albert worked closely with Film Ventures International between 1978 through the 1980s creating advertising campaigns for the theatrical release of their films, including Kill or Be Killed, They Call Me Bruce, The House on Sorority Row, Breaker, Breaker, Great White, Mortuary, and Pieces.
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Original:  He was one of the last people to see Edward L. Montoro, Film Ventures founder , before he mysteriously disappeared .
Revised:  He was one of the last people to see Edward L. Montoro, Film Ventures founder .
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Original:   Albert formed Sawmill Entertainment in 1988 which was responsible for developing, producing and licensing most of his motion pictures.
Revised:  In 1988, Albert formed Sawmill Entertainment in 1988 which was responsible for developing, producing and licensing most of his motion pictures.
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Original:   Albert formed Sawmill Entertainment in 1988 which was responsible for developing, producing and licensing most of his motion pictures.
Revised:  Albert formed Sawmill Entertainment , which was responsible for developing, producing and licensing most of his motion pictures.
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Original:  Besides producing The Forbidden Dance for Columbia Pictures and Menahem Golan, Albert collaborated with Mark Amin of Trimark Pictures, producing the horror exploitation film Demonwarp.
Revised:  Besides producing The Forbidden Dance for Columbia Pictures and Menahem Golan, Albert collaborated with Mark Amin of Trimark Pictures, producing the horror film Demonwarp.
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Original:  Just as with The Forbidden Dance, Demonwarp was carefully budgeted so that the distribution commitments that were made before the film went into production exceeded the actual cost of making the picture .
Revised:  As with The Forbidden Dance, Demonwarp was carefully budgeted so that the distribution commitments that were made before the film went into production exceeded the actual cost of making the picture .
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Original:  Just as with The Forbidden Dance, Demonwarp was carefully budgeted so that the distribution commitments that were made before the film went into production exceeded the actual cost of making the picture .
Revised:  Just as with The Forbidden Dance, Demonwarp was budgeted so that the distribution commitments that were made before the film went into production exceeded the actual cost of making the picture .
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Original:  Just as with The Forbidden Dance, Demonwarp was carefully budgeted so that the distribution commitments that were made before the film went into production exceeded the actual cost of making the picture .
Revised:  Just as with The Forbidden Dance, Demonwarp was carefully budgeted so that the distribution commitments that were made before the film went into production exceeded the cost of making the picture .
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Original:  Just as with The Forbidden Dance, Demonwarp was carefully budgeted so that the distribution commitments that were made before the film went into production exceeded the actual cost of making the picture .
Revised:  Just as with The Forbidden Dance, Demonwarp was carefully budgeted so that the distribution commitments that were made before the film went into production exceeded the actual cost of making the picture 
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Original:  Albert practices entertainment law in North Hollywood since 1999, representing distribution companies and production companies all over the world .
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Original: The Northwest Atlantic Mid-Ocean Channel (NAMOC) is the main body of a turbidite system of channels and canyons running on the sea bottom from the Hudson Strait, through the Labrador Sea and ending at the Sohm Abyssal Plain in the Atlantic Ocean.
Revised: The Northwest Atlantic Mid-Ocean Channel (NAMOC) is the main body of a turbidity current system of channels and canyons running on the sea bottom from the Hudson Strait, through the Labrador Sea and ending at the Sohm Abyssal Plain in the Atlantic Ocean.
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Original:  It is 100–200 meters deep and 2–5 km wide at the channel floor.
Revised:  It is 100–200 m deep and 2–5 km wide at the channel floor.
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Original:  The rising levees of the NAMOC (about 100 m above the sea bed) often hinder confluence of some tributaries, which instead run along NAMOC for hundreds of kilometers .
Revised:  The rising levees of the NAMOC (about 100 m above the sea bed) often hinder confluence of some tributaries, which instead run along NAMOC for hundreds of km .
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Original:  Its western (right-hand, max. height 250 m) levee rises some 100 meters above the eastern one (max. height 150 m).
Revised:  Its western (right-hand, max. height 250 m) levee rises some 100 m above the eastern one (max. height 150 m).
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Original:  As an example, with its emphasis on personal rather than impersonal interaction, Callenbach's Ecotopian society anticipates the development and liberal usage of videoconferencing and Zoom .
Revised:  As an example, with its emphasis on personal rather than impersonal interaction, Callenbach's Ecotopian society anticipates the development and liberal usage of videoconferencing .
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Original: American science fiction writers Category:Environmental fiction writers Category:Simple living advocates Category:People from Williamsport, Pennsylvania Category: Intentional communities Category:University of Chicago alumni Category:University of Paris alumni Category:20th-century American male writers Category:Novelists from Pennsylvania Category:20th-century American non-fiction writers Category:American male non-fiction writers Category:American expatriates in Fran
Revised: American science fiction writers Category:Environmental fiction writers Category:Simple living advocates Category:People from Williamsport, Pennsylvania Category: People of intentional communities Category:University of Chicago alumni Category:University of Paris alumni Category:20th-century American male writers Category:Novelists from Pennsylvania Category:20th-century American non-fiction writers Category:American male non-fiction writers Category:American expatriates in Fran
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Original: ARGIC documen     
Revised: ARGIC document 
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Original: Gérard Labrune is a French syndicalist born on in Vatan(Indre)See the notes on the French Economic, Social and Environmental Council's website  In 1999, he became the national president of the SNB and president of the National Federation of Credit Institutions' Union (fédération nationale des syndicats des établissements de crédit, URL Le Monde from  and president of the National Federation of Finance and Banking (fédération nationale de la finance et de la banque).
Revised: Gérard Labrune (born 2 September 1943 in Vatan, Indre, France) French Economic, Social and Environmental Council's website In 1999, he became the national president of the SNB and president of the National Federation of Credit Institutions' Union (fédération nationale des syndicats des établissements de crédit, URL Le Monde from and president of the National Federation of Finance and Banking (fédération nationale de la finance et de la banque).
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Original: Gérard Labrune is a French syndicalist born on in Vatan(Indre)See the notes on the French Economic, Social and Environmental Council's website  In 1999, he became the national president of the SNB and president of the National Federation of Credit Institutions' Union (fédération nationale des syndicats des établissements de crédit, URL Le Monde from  and president of the National Federation of Finance and Banking (fédération nationale de la finance et de la banque).
Revised: Gérard Labrune is a French syndicalist born on in Vatan(Indre)See the notes on the French Economic, Social and Environmental Council's website is a French syndicalist In 1999, he became the national president of the SNB and president of the National Federation of Credit Institutions' Union (fédération nationale des syndicats des établissements de crédit, URL Le Monde from and president of the National Federation of Finance and Banking (fédération nationale de la finance et de la banque).
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Original:  He was elected secretary general of the CFE-CGC in . See his biographical notes on the CFE-CGC's website
Revised:  He was elected secretary general of the CFE-CGC in URL See his biographical notes on the CFE-CGC's website
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Original: Key elements include 24‑hour in‑house coverage by general surgeons and prompt availability of care in varying specialties—such as orthopedic surgery, cardiothoracic surgery, neurosurgery, plastic surgery, anesthesiology, emergency medicine, radiology, internal medicine, otolaryngology and oral and maxillofacial surgery (trained to treat injuries of the facial skin, muscles, bones)
Revised: Key elements include 24‑hour in‑house coverage by general surgeons and prompt availability of care in varying specialties—such as orthopedic surgery, cardiothoracic surgery, neurosurgery, plastic surgery, anesthesiology, emergency medicine, radiology, internal medicine, otolaryngology and oral and maxillofacial surgery 
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Original: US According to the CDC, injuries are the leading cause of death for American children and young adults ages 1–19.
Revised: U.S. According to the CDC, injuries are the leading cause of death for American children and young adults ages 1–19.
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Original:  In the United States of America, Drs. Robert J. Baker and Robert J. Freeark established the first civilian Shock Trauma Unit at Cook County Hospital in Chicago, IL on March 16, 1966.
Revised:  In the United States of America, Robert J. Baker and Robert J. Freeark established the first civilian Shock Trauma Unit at Cook County Hospital in Chicago, IL on March 16, 1966.
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Original:  In the United States of America, Drs. Robert J. Baker and Robert J. Freeark established the first civilian Shock Trauma Unit at Cook County Hospital in Chicago, IL on March 16, 1966.
Revised:  In the United States of America, Drs. Robert J. Baker and Robert J. Freeark established the first civilian Shock Trauma Unit at Cook County Hospital in Chicago, Illinois on March 16, 1966.
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Original:  Dr. David R. Boyd interned at Cook County Hospital from 1963 to 1964 before being drafted into the Army of the United States of America.
Revised:  David R. Boyd interned at Cook County Hospital from 1963 to 1964 before being drafted into the Army of the United States of America.
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Original:  Upon his release from the Army, Dr. Boyd became the first shock-trauma fellow at the R Adams Cowley Shock Trauma Center, and then went on to develop the National System for Emergency Medical Services, under President Ford.
Revised:  Upon his release from the Army, Boyd became the first shock-trauma fellow at the R Adams Cowley Shock Trauma Center, and then went on to develop the National System for Emergency Medical Services, under President Ford.
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Original:  In 1968 the American Trauma Society was created by various co-founders to include Dr. R Adams Cowley, Dr. Rene Joyeuse as they saw the importance of increased education and training of emergency providers and for nationwide quality trauma care.
Revised:  In 1968 the American Trauma Society was created by various co-founders to include R Adams Cowley, Dr. Rene Joyeuse as they saw the importance of increased education and training of emergency providers and for nationwide quality trauma care.
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Original:  In 1968 the American Trauma Society was created by various co-founders to include Dr. R Adams Cowley, Dr. Rene Joyeuse as they saw the importance of increased education and training of emergency providers and for nationwide quality trauma care.
Revised:  In 1968 the American Trauma Society was created by various co-founders to include Dr. R Adams Cowley, Rene Joyeuse as they saw the importance of increased education and training of emergency providers and for nationwide quality trauma care.
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Original:  Canada According to the founder of the Trauma Unit at Sunnybrook Health Sciences Centre in Toronto, Ontario, Dr. Marvin Tile, "the nature of injuries at Sunnybrook has changed over the years.
Revised:  Canada According to the founder of the Trauma Unit at Sunnybrook Health Sciences Centre in Toronto, Ontario, Marvin Tile, "the nature of injuries at Sunnybrook has changed over the years.
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Original:  Numerous US hospitals that are not verified by ACS claim trauma center designation.
Revised:  Numerous U.S. hospitals that are not verified by ACS claim trauma center designation.
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Original:  It should be mentioned that many Level II centers are staffed to Level I requirements during business hours, and the only thing holding them back from a permanent Level I rating is the fact that specialty surgeons are not staffed 24/7 but are rather 'on call' during non-business hours.
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Original:  A trauma-trained nurse is immediately available, and physicians are available upon patient arrival in the Emergency Department .
Revised:  A trauma-trained nurse is immediately available, and physicians are available upon patient arrival in the emergency department .
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Original: Consultation/Verification Program Reference Guide of Suggested Classification Lower levels of trauma centers may only be able to provide initial care and stabilization of a traumatic injury and arrange for transfer of the victim to a higher level of trauma care.
Revised: Consultation/Verification Program Reference Guide of Suggested Classification Lower levels of trauma centers may only be able to provide initial care and stabilization of a traumatic injury and arrange for transfer of the patient to a higher level of trauma care.
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Original: The operation of a trauma center is extremely expensive . Some areas , especially rural regions, are underserved by trauma centers because of that expense.
Revised: The operation of a trauma center is often expensive and some areas may be underserved by trauma centers because of that expense.
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Original:  A variety of methods have been developed for dealing with that.
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Original:  A trauma center will often have a helipad for receiving patients that have been airlifted to the hospital.
Revised:  A trauma center may have a helipad for receiving patients that have been airlifted to the hospital.
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Original: Consultation/Verification Program Reference Guide of Suggested Classification Lower levels of trauma centers may only be able to provide  initial care and stabilization of a traumatic injury and arrange for transfer of the patient to a higher level of trauma care.
Revised: Consultation/Verification Program Reference Guide of Suggested Classification Lower levels of trauma centers may be able to provide initial care and stabilization of a traumatic injury and arrange for transfer of the patient to a higher level of trauma care.
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Original: Consultation/Verification Program Reference Guide of Suggested Classification Lower levels of trauma centers may only be able to provide  initial care and stabilization of a traumatic injury and arrange for transfer of the patient to a higher level of trauma care.
Revised: Consultation/Verification Program Reference Guide of Suggested Classification Lower levels of trauma centers may only be able to provide only initial care and stabilization of a traumatic injury and arrange for transfer of the patient to a higher level of trauma care.
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Original:  TIEP maintains an inventory of trauma centers in the US, collects data and develops information related to the causes, treatment and outcomes of injury, and facilitates the exchange of information among trauma care institutions, care providers, researchers, payers and policy makers .
Revised:  TIEP maintains an inventory of trauma centers in the US, collects data and develops information related to the causes, treatment and outcomes of injury, and facilitates the exchange of information among trauma care institutions, care providers, researchers, payers and policymakers .
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Original:  A trauma-trained nurse is immediately available, and physicians are available upon the patient's arrival to the Emergency Department.
Revised:  A trauma-trained nurse is immediately available, and physicians are available upon the patient's arrival in the Emergency Department.
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Original:  Belize Montego Bay Marine Park, Jamaica Pedra da Risca do Meio Marine State Park, Brazil  Saba National Marine Park, Saba Europe Karaburun-Sazan National Marine Park, Albania Iroise Marine Park, Brittany  , France Zakynthos Marine Park, Greece Alonnisos Marine Park, Greece Kosterhavet National Park, Bohuslän, Sweden Ytre Hvaler National Park, Norway Færder National Park, Norway Jomfruland National Park, Norway Raet National Park, Norway Pembrokeshire Coast National Park, Wales
Revised:  Belize Montego Bay Marine Park, Jamaica Pedra da Risca do Meio Marine State Park, Brazil Martinique Marine Natural Park, Martinique Saba National Marine Park, Saba Europe Karaburun-Sazan National Marine Park, Albania Iroise Marine Park, Brittany , France Zakynthos Marine Park, Greece Alonnisos Marine Park, Greece Kosterhavet National Park, Bohuslän, Sweden Ytre Hvaler National Park, Norway Færder National Park, Norway Jomfruland National Park, Norway Raet National Park, Norway Pembrokeshire Coast National Park, Wales
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Original:  easy and safe measurement detection of ischemic heart disease with very high diagnostic sensitivity and specificity early prevention of the coronary disease, objective and not only statistical risk validation monitoring of the effects of the treatment and early classifying patients to reference tests, e.g. PTCA, SPECT, etc. analysing the efficiency of particular biologically active substances ( farmacology , nutriceutics, dietary supplements) and other methods (e.g. physical medicine)
Revised:  easy and safe measurement detection of ischemic heart disease with very high diagnostic sensitivity and specificity early prevention of the coronary disease, objective and not only statistical risk validation monitoring of the effects of the treatment and early classifying patients to reference tests, e.g. PTCA, SPECT, etc. analysing the efficiency of particular biologically active substances ( pharmacology , nutriceutics, dietary supplements) and other methods (e.g. physical medicine)
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Original:  Though their bearers usually maintain the monarchical styles and titles of their sovereign ancestors, both their independent activities and their relations with the central and regional governments of Nigeria are closer in substance to those of the high nobility of old Europe than to those of actual reigning monarchs.
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