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Original:  Kerry claims that people have seen the doll move in front of them, and that the doll has left visible scuff marks around the house . Currently, Letta Me Out is owned by Kerry in Warwick, Queensland .
Revised:  Walton claims that people have seen the doll move in front of them, and that the doll has left visible scuff marks around the house . Currently, Letta Me Out is owned by Kerry in Warwick, Queensland .
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Original:  Kerry claims that people have seen the doll move in front of them, and that the doll has left visible scuff marks around the house . Currently, Letta Me Out is owned by Kerry in Warwick, Queensland .
Revised:  Kerry claims that people have seen the doll move in front of them, and that the doll has left visible scuff marks around the house .
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Original:  It is claimed that Mandy's eyes follow visitors as they walk in the room .
Revised:  It is claimed that Mandy's eyes supposedly follow museum visitors .
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Original:  The doll gained notoriety when it appeared alongside the curator and donor of the doll on the Montel Williams Show.
Revised:  The doll has been featured on the Montel Williams Show.
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Original:  Worldbuilding often involves the creation of maps, a backstory, a flora, a fauna, different peoples and their culture and technology, (And in many cases if one is writing speculative fiction, different races), including social customs and, in some cases, an invented language for the world.
Revised:  Worldbuilding often involves the creation of maps, a backstory, a flora, a fauna, different peoples and their technology, (And in many cases if one is writing speculative fiction, different races), including social customs and, in some cases, an invented language for the world.
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Original:  Worldbuilding often involves the creation of Geography , a backstory, flora, fauna, inhabitants, technology and often if writing speculative fiction, different races.
Revised:  Worldbuilding often involves the creation of geography , a backstory, flora, fauna, inhabitants, technology and often if writing speculative fiction, different races.
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Original: Worldbuilding is the process of constructing an imaginary world, sometimes associated with a fictional universe.
Revised: Wo dbuilding is the process of constructing an imaginary world, sometimes associated with a fictional universe.
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Original:  With the bottom-up approach, the designer focuses on a small part of the world needed for his or her purposes.
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Original: In early 2018, Patel-owned Apex Heart Institute became the first hospital outside USA to introduce robotic angioplasty stenting by acquiring Corindus Corpath Vascular Robotic System GRX200 for $1.5 million.
Revised:  stenting by acquiring Corindus Corpath Vascular Robotic System GRX200 for $1.5 million.
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Original: Prof. Dr. Tejas M. Patel (MD, DM, FACC, FSCAI, FESC) is a cardiologist from Ahmedabad, India and chairman and chief interventional cardiologist at Apex Heart Institute, Ahmedabad.
Revised:  Tejas M. Patel (MD, DM, FACC, FSCAI, FESC) is a cardiologist from Ahmedabad, India and chairman and chief interventional cardiologist at Apex Heart Institute, Ahmedabad.
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Original: Prof. Dr. Tejas M. Patel (MD, DM, FACC, FSCAI, FESC) is a cardiologist from Ahmedabad, India and chairman and chief interventional cardiologist at Apex Heart Institute, Ahmedabad.
Revised: Prof. Dr. Tejas M. Patel is a cardiologist from Ahmedabad, India and chairman and chief interventional cardiologist at Apex Heart Institute, Ahmedabad.
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Original: File:Christiansborg Castle2.jpg|A contemporary drawing of the Danish colonial fort, Fort Christiansborg, now Osu Castle.
Revised: File:Christiansborg Castle2.jpg|A contemporary drawing of Fort Christiansborg, now Osu Castle.
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Original:  As a result, and "because mortality rates were higher than fertility rates among slaves in the Danish West Indies," it became "necessary to import slaves ever year."
Revised:  As a result, and "because mortality rates were higher than fertility rates among slaves in the Danish West Indies," it became "necessary to import slaves every year."
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Original:  The Danish navy and its "mercantile marine " were recorded as the fourth largest in Europe in this period.
Revised:  The Danish navy and its mercantile marine were recorded as the fourth largest in Europe in this period.
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Original:  With the establishment of the Gold Coast colony in the 1660s, " commodities such as gold and ivory dominated " at first, but by " the turn of the 18th century, slaves were the most important commodity in the Danish trade.
Revised:  With the establishment of the Gold Coast colony in the 1660s, commodities such as gold and ivory dominated " at first, but by " the turn of the 18th century, slaves were the most important commodity in the Danish trade.
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Original:  With the establishment of the Gold Coast colony in the 1660s, " commodities such as gold and ivory dominated " at first, but by " the turn of the 18th century, slaves were the most important commodity in the Danish trade.
Revised:  With the establishment of the Gold Coast colony in the 1660s, " commodities such as gold and ivory dominated at first, but by " the turn of the 18th century, slaves were the most important commodity in the Danish trade.
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Original:  With the establishment of the Gold Coast colony in the 1660s, " commodities such as gold and ivory dominated " at first, but by " the turn of the 18th century, slaves were the most important commodity in the Danish trade.
Revised:  With the establishment of the Gold Coast colony in the 1660s, " commodities such as gold and ivory dominated " at first, but by the turn of the 18th century, slaves were the most important commodity in the Danish trade.
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Original:  " Those who commanded the " large slave ships were often instructed to convert their cabin into a kind of moveable showroom upon arrival on the African coast.
Revised:  Those who commanded the " large slave ships were often instructed to convert their cabin into a kind of moveable showroom upon arrival on the African coast.
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Original:  " Those who commanded the " large slave ships were often instructed to convert their cabin into a kind of moveable showroom upon arrival on the African coast.
Revised:  " Those who commanded the large slave ships were often instructed to convert their cabin into a kind of moveable showroom upon arrival on the African coast.
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Original:  " While throughout the 18th century, " Danish exports of enslaved Africans accounted for about 5 percent of the total exports from the Gold Coast, " by the 1780s, this was up to 10 percent.
Revised:  While throughout the 18th century, " Danish exports of enslaved Africans accounted for about 5 percent of the total exports from the Gold Coast, " by the 1780s, this was up to 10 percent.
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Original:  " While throughout the 18th century, " Danish exports of enslaved Africans accounted for about 5 percent of the total exports from the Gold Coast, " by the 1780s, this was up to 10 percent.
Revised:  " While throughout the 18th century, Danish exports of enslaved Africans accounted for about 5 percent of the total exports from the Gold Coast, " by the 1780s, this was up to 10 percent.
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Original:  " While throughout the 18th century, " Danish exports of enslaved Africans accounted for about 5 percent of the total exports from the Gold Coast, " by the 1780s, this was up to 10 percent.
Revised:  " While throughout the 18th century, " Danish exports of enslaved Africans accounted for about 5 percent of the total exports from the Gold Coast, by the 1780s, this was up to 10 percent.
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Original:  While these possessions were rather small, at only 350 square kilometers collectively, they became " of utmost importance in the transatlantic slave trade under the Danish flag because of their intensive and highly profitable sugar production which depended on slave labor.
Revised:  While these possessions were rather small, at only 350 square kilometers collectively, they became of utmost importance in the transatlantic slave trade under the Danish flag because of their intensive and highly profitable sugar production which depended on slave labor.
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Original:  " As a result, and " because mortality rates were higher than fertility rates among slaves in the Danish West Indies, " it became " necessary to import slaves every year.
Revised:  As a result, and " because mortality rates were higher than fertility rates among slaves in the Danish West Indies, " it became " necessary to import slaves every year.
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Original:  " As a result, and " because mortality rates were higher than fertility rates among slaves in the Danish West Indies, " it became " necessary to import slaves every year.
Revised:  " As a result, and because mortality rates were higher than fertility rates among slaves in the Danish West Indies, " it became " necessary to import slaves every year.
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Original:  " As a result, and " because mortality rates were higher than fertility rates among slaves in the Danish West Indies, " it became " necessary to import slaves every year.
Revised:  " As a result, and " because mortality rates were higher than fertility rates among slaves in the Danish West Indies, it became necessary to import slaves every year.
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Original:  " Most of these enslaved human beings came " directly from Africa " while others came from " foreign Caribbean islands.
Revised:  Most of these enslaved human beings came " directly from Africa " while others came from " foreign Caribbean islands.
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Original:  " Most of these enslaved human beings came " directly from Africa " while others came from " foreign Caribbean islands.
Revised:  " Most of these enslaved human beings came directly from Africa " while others came from " foreign Caribbean islands.
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Original:  " Most of these enslaved human beings came " directly from Africa " while others came from " foreign Caribbean islands.
Revised:  " Most of these enslaved human beings came " directly from Africa while others came from " foreign Caribbean islands.
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Original:  " Most of these enslaved human beings came " directly from Africa " while others came from " foreign Caribbean islands.
Revised:  " Most of these enslaved human beings came " directly from Africa " while others came from foreign Caribbean islands.
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Original:  " After the slave trade was abolished in 1803, Danish colonizers attempted to establish " cotton, coffee, and sugar plantations on the Gold Coast instead, " yet these were largely unsuccessful.
Revised:  After the slave trade was abolished in 1803, Danish colonizers attempted to establish " cotton, coffee, and sugar plantations on the Gold Coast instead, " yet these were largely unsuccessful.
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Original:  " After the slave trade was abolished in 1803, Danish colonizers attempted to establish " cotton, coffee, and sugar plantations on the Gold Coast instead, " yet these were largely unsuccessful.
Revised:  " After the slave trade was abolished in 1803, Danish colonizers attempted to establish cotton, coffee, and sugar plantations on the Gold Coast instead, " yet these were largely unsuccessful.
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Original:  " After the slave trade was abolished in 1803, Danish colonizers attempted to establish " cotton, coffee, and sugar plantations on the Gold Coast instead, " yet these were largely unsuccessful.
Revised:  " After the slave trade was abolished in 1803, Danish colonizers attempted to establish " cotton, coffee, and sugar plantations on the Gold Coast instead, yet these were largely unsuccessful.
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Original:  By 1817, " almost all of the Danish posts on the Coast were abandoned, with the exception of Fort Christiansborg, " which was, along with the other posts, sold to the British in 1850.
Revised:  By 1817, almost all of the Danish posts on the Coast were abandoned, with the exception of Fort Christiansborg, " which was, along with the other posts, sold to the British in 1850.
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Original:  By 1817, " almost all of the Danish posts on the Coast were abandoned, with the exception of Fort Christiansborg, " which was, along with the other posts, sold to the British in 1850.
Revised:  By 1817, " almost all of the Danish posts on the Coast were abandoned, with the exception of Fort Christiansborg, which was, along with the other posts, sold to the British in 1850.
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Original:  The Danish slave trade constituted about 1 percent of this trade, with " about 100,000 Africans embarked.
Revised:  The Danish slave trade constituted about 1 percent of this trade, with about 100,000 Africans embarked.
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Original:  " Denmark was reportedly the first European colonial empire to ban its slave trade in 1792, although this law did not come into effect until 1803, and illegal trading continued into the nineteenth century.
Revised:  Denmark was reportedly the first European colonial empire to ban its slave trade in 1792, although this law did not come into effect until 1803, and illegal trading continued into the nineteenth century.
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Original: In northern Laos, there are 400 ethnic Cosao people in 2 villages in Phongsaly Province, namely Ban Nanli 板南里 (21°45′15″N 102°11′21″E) and Ban Shalue 板沙略 in Outay District 乌德县 (Bai 2015:2-3).
Revised: In northern Laos, there are 400 ethnic Cosao people in 2 villages in Phongsaly Province, namely Ban Nanli 板南里 (21°45′15″N 102°11′21″E) and Ban Shalue 板沙略 in Boun Tay District 乌德县 (Bai 2015:2-3).
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Original: Cosao (autonym: tsʰo55 sɔ55 ;Bai (2015:1) ) is a Loloish language of China and Laos.
Revised: Cosao (autonym: ;Bai (2015:1) ) is a Loloish language of China and Laos.
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Original:  The Cosao call themselves tsʰo55 sɔ55 , but are referred to by other ethnic groups as the Paijiao people (排角人).
Revised:  The Cosao call themselves , but are referred to by other ethnic groups as the Paijiao people (排角人).
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Original:  A randomized control trial led by Alexander Zarbock, M.D., at University Hospital Muenster, Germany has indicated that using Astute Medical’s NephroCheck Test to identify patients at high risk for acute kidney injury (AKI) after open-heart surgery and providing them treatment recommended by globally-recognized care guidelines significantly improved outcomes by reducing the occurrence of moderate to severe AKI more than 33 percent.
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Original: NephroCheck is an assay to assess the risk of  developing acute kidney injury.
Revised: NephroCheck is a test that tries to determine the risk of developing acute kidney injury.
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Original:  Application of TIMP-2 and IGFBP7 via NephroCheck The markers appear to be short-lived in the urine after AKI has occurred.
Revised:  and IGFBP7 via NephroCheck The markers appear to be short-lived in the urine after AKI has occurred.
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Original:  It exploited the two German protectorates in  West Africa (Togo and Cameroon) but did not actually govern them — unlike its counterpart in German East Africa.
Revised:  It exploited the two German protectorates in German West Africa (Togo and Cameroon) but did not actually govern them — unlike its counterpart in German East Africa.
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Original:  History Flag of the German West Africa Company (DWAG) The German West African Company was established as a chartered company with a headquarters in Hamburg.
Revised:  History The German West African Company was established as a chartered company with a headquarters in Hamburg.
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Original:  However, the invasion was not recognized as legitimate by the United Nations (UN), which continued to regard Portugal as the legal Administering Power of East Timor.
Revised:  However, the invasion was not recognized as legal by the United Nations (UN), which continued to regard Portugal as the legal Administering Power of East Timor.
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Original: C. R. Boxer, "Portuguese Timor: A Rough Island Story, 1515-1960." History Today (May 1960) 19#5) pp 349-355. </ref>
Revised: C. R. Boxer, "Portuguese Timor: A Rough Island Story, 1515-1960." History Today (May 1960) 19#5) pp 349-355. 
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Original: Modern Genre Theory The origins of modern genre theory is linked back to the European Romantic movement in the late eighteenth and early nineteenth centuries, where the concept of genre was scrutinized heavily.
Revised: Modern genre theory The origins of modern genre theory is linked back to the European Romantic movement in the late eighteenth and early nineteenth centuries, where the concept of genre was scrutinized heavily.
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Original:  Genres may be determined  by literary technique, tone, content, or even (as in the case of fiction) length.
Revised:  Genres may be determined and um by literary technique, tone, content, or even (as in the case of fiction) length.
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Original:  Genres may be determined and um by literary technique, tone, content, or even (as in the case of fiction) length.
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Original:  "Genres", A Guide to the Study of Literature: A Companion Text for Core Studies 6, Landmarks of Literature, English Department, Brooklyn College Dramatic poetry might include comedy, tragedy, melodrama, and mixtures like tragicomedy.
Revised:  Dramatic poetry might include comedy, tragedy, melodrama, and mixtures like tragicomedy.
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Original:  Notes References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collins, James Henderson, II. Exhortations to philosophy : the protreptics of Plato, isocrates, and aristotle.
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collins, James Henderson, II. Exhortations to philosophy : the protreptics of Plato, isocrates, and aristotle.
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Original:  Notes References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collins, James Henderson, II. Exhortations to philosophy : the protreptics of Plato, isocrates, and aristotle.
Revised:  Notes %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Collins, James Henderson, II. Exhortations to philosophy : the protreptics of Plato, isocrates, and aristotle.
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Original:  He came to London with Captain Henry Wilson, who he met in 1783, when Captain Wilson's ship, the Antelope, was wrecked on the island of Oroolong in Western Palau .
Revised:  He came to London with Captain Henry Wilson, who he met in 1783, when Captain Wilson's ship, the Antelope, was wrecked on the island of Oroolong in Western Palau 
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Original: File:Prince Lee Boo.jpg|by Henry Kingsbury, after Georgiana Jane Henderson (née Keate)]] Prince Lee Boo ( 1764-27 December 1784) was the second son of Ibedul (Abba Thule), the ruler of Koror in the Pelew Islands, now called Palau.
Revised: File:Prince Lee Boo.jpg|by Henry Kingsbury, after Georgiana Jane Henderson (née Keate)]] Prince Lee Boo ( 1764 – 27 December 1784) was the second son of Ibedul (Abba Thule), the ruler of Koror in the Pelew Islands, now called Palau.
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Original:  When the China trader Antelope,  was wrecked on the island of Oroolong in Western Palau in 1783, on a voyage to China for the East Indian Company, its survivors, including Captain Henry Wilson  spent three months on Palau.
Revised:  When the China trader Antelope, on a voyage to China for the East Indian Company, was wrecked on the island of Oroolong in Western Palau in 1783, on a voyage to China for the East Indian Company, its survivors, including Captain Henry Wilson spent three months on Palau.
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Original:  When the China trader Antelope,  was wrecked on the island of Oroolong in Western Palau in 1783, on a voyage to China for the East Indian Company, its survivors, including Captain Henry Wilson  spent three months on Palau.
Revised:  When the China trader Antelope, was wrecked on the island of Oroolong in Western Palau in 1783, its survivors, including Captain Henry Wilson spent three months on Palau.
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Original:  When the China trader Antelope,  was wrecked on the island of Oroolong in Western Palau in 1783, on a voyage to China for the East Indian Company, its survivors, including Captain Henry Wilson  spent three months on Palau.
Revised:  When the China trader Antelope, was wrecked on the island of Oroolong in Western Palau in 1783, on a voyage to China for the East Indian Company, its survivors, including Captain Henry Wilson , spent three months on Palau.
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Original:  When the survivors were finally rescued, the king permitted him Captain Wilson agreed to take Lee Boo to London to acquire more knowledge about Europe.
Revised:  When the survivors were finally rescued, Captain Wilson agreed to take Lee Boo to London to acquire more knowledge about Europe.
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Original:  He arrived around a decade after the Tahitian Omai  on 14 July 1784 in Portsmouth abroad the Morse, and was quickly dubbed "The Black Prince" by London society, who were charmed by his poise and intelligence.
Revised:  He arrived about a decade after the Tahitian Omai on 14 July 1784 in Portsmouth abroad the Morse, and was quickly dubbed "The Black Prince" by London society, who were charmed by his poise and intelligence.
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Original:  He arrived around a decade after the Tahitian Omai  on 14 July 1784 in Portsmouth abroad the Morse, and was quickly dubbed "The Black Prince" by London society, who were charmed by his poise and intelligence.
Revised:  He arrived around a decade after the Tahitian Omai , on 14 July 1784 in Portsmouth abroad the Morse, and was quickly dubbed "The Black Prince" by London society, who were charmed by his poise and intelligence.
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Original:  He arrived around a decade after the Tahitian Omai  on 14 July 1784 in Portsmouth abroad the Morse, and was quickly dubbed "The Black Prince" by London society, who were charmed by his poise and intelligence.
Revised:  He arrived around a decade after the Tahitian Omai on 14 July 1784 , in Portsmouth, aboard the Morse, and was quickly dubbed "The Black Prince" by London society, who were charmed by his poise and intelligence.
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Original:  however , he died of smallpox in May 1784, some six months after his arrival in London on 27 December 1784, aged 20 years  .
Revised:  however , he died of smallpox in May 1784, some six months after his arrival in London . He was 20 years .
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Original:  however , he died of smallpox in May 1784, some six months after his arrival in London on 27 December 1784, aged 20 years  .
Revised:  however , he died of smallpox in May 1784, some six months after his arrival in London on 27 December 1784, aged 20 years old .
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Original: File:Prince Lee Boo.jpg|by Henry Kingsbury, after Georgiana Jane Henderson (née Keate)]] Prince Lee Boo (1764 – 27 December 1784) was the second son of Ibedul (Abba Thule) , the ruler of Koror in the Pelew Islands, now called Palau.
Revised: File:Prince Lee Boo.jpg|by Henry Kingsbury, after Georgiana Jane Henderson (née Keate)]] Prince Lee Boo (1764 – 27 December 1784) was the second son of Abba Thule , the ruler of Koror in the Pelew Islands, now called Palau.
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