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Original:  If jurors decide a crime has taken place, it will be sent to the attorney generals office.
Revised:  If jurors decide a crime has taken place, it will be sent to the Attorney General's office.
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Original:  Ms. Smith stated that she was devastated over the loss of her son
Revised:  Ms. Smith said that she was devastated over the loss of her son
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Original: American model and actress Anna Nicole Smith's son Daniel Smith, 20  died in the Bahamas, while visiting his mother, who had just given birth to a girl.
Revised: American model and actress Anna Nicole Smith's son Daniel Smith, 20 , died in the Bahamas, while visiting his mother, who had just given birth to a girl.
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Original:  Authories also say that there is no sign of physical injury "He was found in a condition of non-responsiveness.
Revised:  Authorities also say that there is no sign of physical injury "He was found in a condition of non-responsiveness.
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Original:  I am not certain who made the alarm, and doctors were called in  but he was pronounced dead," said Assistant Commissioner of the Royal Bahamas Police Force, Reginald Ferguson.
Revised:  I am not certain who made the alarm, and doctors were called in , but he was pronounced dead," said Assistant Commissioner of the Royal Bahamas Police Force, Reginald Ferguson.
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Original: Individual letters detailing Progressive Enterprises' latest pay offer have started arriving at locked-out supermarket worker's homes ;
Revised: Individual letters detailing Progressive Enterprises' latest pay offer have started arriving at locked-out supermarket worker's homes 
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Original:  It is illegal in th State of California.
Revised:  It is illegal in the State of California.
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Original: Hewlett-Packard is in a scandal over the alegged illegal investigation of its own board members over leaks from the board to the press.
Revised: Hewlett-Packard (HP) is embroiled in a scandal over the alegged illegal investigation of its own board members over leaks from the board to the press.
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Original: Hewlett-Packard is in a scandal over the alegged illegal investigation of its own board members over leaks from the board to the press.
Revised: Hewlett-Packard is in a scandal over the alleged illegal investigation of its own board members over leaks from the board to the press.
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Original:  The companys admits that it hired private investigators and that they used pretexting to get private phone records of it's own directors.
Revised:  The companys admits that it hired private investigators and that they used pretexting to get private phone records of its own directors.
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Original:  Pretexting is where someone pretends to be the customer when calling the phone company to get their phone records.
Revised:  'Pretexting' is where someone pretends to be the customer when calling the phone company to get their phone records.
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Original:  It is illegal in the State of California.
Revised:  It is illegal in the state of California.
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Original:  VC investor Tom Perkins resigned from the board on May 22nd 2006 over the issue and requested that HP look into the methods used in it's leak inquiry.
Revised:  VC investor Tom Perkins resigned from the board on May 22, 2006 over the issue and requested that HP look into the methods used in it's leak inquiry.
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Original:  VC investor Tom Perkins resigned from the board on May 22nd 2006 over the issue and requested that HP look into the methods used in it's leak inquiry.
Revised:  VC investor Tom Perkins resigned from the board on May 22nd 2006 over the issue and requested that HP look into the methods used in its leak inquiry.
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Original:  The FCC is looking into phone companies who may have supplied the phone records illegally under California law
Revised:  The Federal Communications Commission is looking into phone companies who may have supplied the phone records illegally under California law
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Original:  The companys admits that it hired private investigators and that they used pretexting to get private phone records of its own directors.
Revised:  The company admits that it hired private investigators and that they used pretexting to get private phone records of its own directors.
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Original: In two separate studies, Japanese scientists have shown that eating mandarin oranges decreases the risks of various diseases, including liver cancer, arteriosclerosis, and insulin resistance.
Revised: In two separate studies, Japanese scientists have shown that eating mandarin oranges may decrease the risks of various diseases, including liver cancer, arteriosclerosis, and insulin resistance.
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Original:  Image:Madarines white bg.jpg|In light of the new studies, mandarin orange is being called a "super food".
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Original:  In one study, conducted at the Kyoto Prefectural University of Medicine, patients with chronic viral hepatitis were divided into two groups.
Revised:  thumb In one study, conducted at the Kyoto Prefectural University of Medicine, patients with chronic viral hepatitis were divided into two groups.
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Original:  The studies , and many others, are being presented during a four-day symposium called "Functional Foods and Health", which is part of the meeting of the American Chemical Society.
Revised:  The studies are being presented during a four-day symposium called "Functional Foods and Health", which is part of the meeting of the American Chemical Society.
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Original:  "The more types of fruit and vegetables you can include in your diet the better", she said   
Revised:  "The more types of fruit and vegetables you can include in your diet the better", she said . 
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Original:  "The more types of fruit and vegetables you can include in your diet the better  " , she said.
Revised:  "The more types of fruit and vegetables you can include in your diet the better . " , she said.
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Original:  "The more types of fruit and vegetables you can include in your diet the better  " , she said.
Revised:  "The more types of fruit and vegetables you can include in your diet the better " 
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Original:  These studies, and many others, are being presented at the 232nd national meeting of the American Chemical Society from September 10 to September 13, 2006.
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Original: A stampede in a stadium in Yemen, where President Ali Abdullah Salih was holding a pre-election rally killed atleast 51 people and more than 230 were injured.
Revised: A stampede in a stadium in Yemen, where President Ali Abdullah Saleh was holding a pre-election rally killed atleast 51 people and more than 230 were injured.
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Original:  The incident happened at Ibb, about 180 kilometers south of Yemen’s capital, Sanaa   
Revised:  The incident happened at Ibb, about 180 kilometers south of Yemen’s capital, Sanaa . 
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Original: Some weapons can also be used to disable small electronic devices, which is because of a small electronic beam emitted from some of the weapons .
Revised: Some weapons can also be used to disable small electronic devices, which is because of a small electronic beam emitted from some of the weapons 
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Original:  The Posse Comitatus Act, as well as the Insurrection Act, officially prohibit federal military units%DIFDELCMD < & %%% personnel from being used for domestic law enforcment.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% personnel from being used for domestic law enforcment.
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Original:  Some non-lethal weapons can also be used to disable electronic devices  &  & 
Revised:  Some non-lethal weapons can also be used to disable electronic devices . & & 
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Original:  Secretary Michael Wynne, has proposed allowing the U. S. millitary to use nonlethal weapons for crowd-control within the U.S. He suggests that using the weapons on U.S. civilians will mitigate concerns about the safety of the weapons when used abroad and reduce public relations problems .  "If we're not willing to use it here against our fellow citizens, then we should not be willing to use it in a wartime situation," said  Wynne.
Revised:  Secretary Michael Wynne, has proposed allowing the U. S. millitary to use nonlethal weapons for crowd-control within the U.S. He suggests that using the weapons on U.S. civilians will mitigate concerns about the safety of the weapons when used abroad and reduce public relations problems . This would also stop some saftey considerations before being used on the battlefield. "If we're not willing to use it here against our fellow citizens, then we should not be willing to use it in a wartime situation," said Wynne.
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Original:  Secretary Michael Wynne, has proposed allowing the U. S. millitary to use nonlethal weapons for crowd-control within the U.S. He suggests that using the weapons on U.S. civilians will mitigate concerns about the safety of the weapons when used abroad and reduce public relations problems .  "If we're not willing to use it here against our fellow citizens, then we should not be willing to use it in a wartime situation," said  Wynne.
Revised:  Secretary Michael Wynne, has proposed allowing the U. S. millitary to use nonlethal weapons for crowd-control within the U.S. He suggests that using the weapons on U.S. civilians will mitigate concerns about the safety of the weapons when used abroad and reduce public relations problems . "If we're not willing to use it here against our fellow citizens, then we should not be willing to use it in a wartime situation," said Secretary Michael Wynne.
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Original:  The US Air Force has paid for much research into nonlethal weapons , but Wynne says they plan to reduce spending until various injury problems are reviewed by airforce experts.
Revised:  The US Air Force has spent a large cut of its budget for nonlethal weapons research , but Wynne says they plan to reduce spending until various injury problems are reviewed by airforce experts.
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Original:  The US Air Force has paid for much research into nonlethal weapons , but Wynne says they plan to reduce spending until various injury problems are reviewed by airforce experts.
Revised:  The US Air Force has paid for much research into nonlethal weapons , but Wynne says that money shouldn't be largely spent until injury problems are reviewed by airforce experts.
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Original:  Some non-lethal weapons can also be used to disable electronic devices .
Revised:  experts, and resolved. Some weapons can also be used to disable electronic devices .
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Original:  The U.S. military also has controversial non-lethal chemical and biological weapons programs, which opponents claim violates treaties restricting chemical biological weapons  
Revised:  biological weapons 
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Original:  The base closings were origginaly planned to create savings by reducing Air Force fees by 24 percent .
Revised:  The base closings were origginaly planned to create savings by reducing Air Force fees by 24 percent 
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Original:   Mark Hurd will replace Dunn, though she will continue to remain a director on the board.
Revised:  Chief Executive Mark Hurd will replace Dunn, though she will continue to remain a director on the board.
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Original:  He said that if it was indeed an IED, police would either attemt to defuse it, or detonate it in an isolated area.
Revised:  He said that if it was indeed an IED, police would either attempt to defuse it, or detonate it in an isolated area.
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Original:  Meanwhile, police in Nashik have seized 11 detanators , 5 gelatin sticks and a revolver from a building namedc Rj Sarthi.
Revised:  Meanwhile, police in Nashik have seized 11 detonators , 5 gelatin sticks and a revolver from a building namedc Rj Sarthi.
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Original:  Although the communally senstive town has so far been quiet, officials have once again declared an alert in Malegaon
Revised:  Although the communally sensitive town has so far been quiet, officials have once again declared an alert in Malegaon
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Original: Meanwhile, police in Nashik have seized 11 detonators, 5 gelatin sticks and a revolver from a building named Raj Sarthi.
Revised: Meanwhile, police in Nashik have seized 11 detonators, 5 gelignite sticks and a revolver from a building named Raj Sarthi.
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Original:  He opined that the mujahideen idea of jihad "went against the nature of God".
Revised:  He claimed that the mujahideen idea of jihad "went against the nature of God".
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Original:  He opined that the mujahideen idea of jihad "went against the nature of God".
Revised:  He opined that the mujahideen and thejihad they are fighting "went against the nature of God".
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Original:  He quoted , without agreeing or disagreeing, Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos , who, on the "issue of jihad, holy war", said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new, and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached".
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos , who, on the "issue of jihad, holy war", said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new, and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached".
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Original:  He quoted , without agreeing or disagreeing, Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos , who, on the "issue of jihad, holy war", said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new, and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached".
Revised:  He quoted , without agreeing or disagreeing, Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new, and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached".
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Original:  He claimed that the mujahideen and thejihad they are fighting "went against the nature of God".
Revised:  He opined that the mujahideen and thejihad they are fighting "went against the nature of God".
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Original:  He claimed that the mujahideen and thejihad they are fighting "went against the nature of God".
Revised:  He claimed that the mujahideen idea of jihad "went against the nature of God".
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Original:  He opined that the mujahideen idea of jihad " went against the nature of God".
Revised:  He opined that the mujahideen idea of jihad " (goes) against the nature of God".
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Original:  He quoted , without agreeing or disagreeing, Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos, who , on the "issue of jihad, holy war", said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new, and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached".
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos, who , on the "issue of jihad, holy war", said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new, and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached".
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Original:  He quoted , without agreeing or disagreeing, Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos, who , on the "issue of jihad, holy war", said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new, and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached".
Revised:  He quoted , without agreeing or disagreeing, Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos, who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new, and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached".
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Original:  The Pope said "Violence is incompatible with the nature of God and the nature of the soul".
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Original:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor  Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " .  The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God"    
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor w: Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " . The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" 
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Original:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor  Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " .  The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God"    
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos |Manuel II Palaiologos. The quotation was, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " . The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" 
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Original:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor  Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " .  The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God"    
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Muhammad brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " . The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" 
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Original:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor  Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " .  The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God"    
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " . The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" 
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Original:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor  Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " .  The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God"    
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached . The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" 
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Original:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor  Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " .  The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God"    
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " . The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" . 
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Original:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor  Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " .  The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God"    
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos , who said, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " . The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" The pope was allegedly upset by this reaction. The Vatican claims the offence was unintentional and that the pope aims to create “respect and dialogue”'' between different cultures and religions. 
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Original:   He quoted Byzantine Emperor w: Manuel II Palaiologos |Manuel II Palaiologos.
Revised:  He quoted Byzantine Emperor Manuel II Palaiologos |Manuel II Palaiologos.
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Original:  The quotation was, "Show me just what Muhammad brought that was new  and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached . " The pope added that in his opinion violence is "incompatible with the nature of God and the nature of the soul", and that he intended to broaden and apply reason.
Revised:  The quotation was, "Show me just what Mohammed brought that was new and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached . " The pope added that in his opinion violence is "incompatible with the nature of God and the nature of the soul", and that he intended to broaden and apply reason.
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Original:  The quotation was, "Show me just what Muhammad brought that was new  and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached . " The pope added that in his opinion violence is "incompatible with the nature of God and the nature of the soul", and that he intended to broaden and apply reason.
Revised:  The quotation was, "Show me just what Muhammad brought that was new , and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached . " The pope added that in his opinion violence is "incompatible with the nature of God and the nature of the soul", and that he intended to broaden and apply reason.
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Original:  The quotation was, "Show me just what Muhammad brought that was new  and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached . " The pope added that in his opinion violence is "incompatible with the nature of God and the nature of the soul", and that he intended to broaden and apply reason.
Revised:  The quotation was, "Show me just what Muhammad brought that was new and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached " The pope added that in his opinion violence is "incompatible with the nature of God and the nature of the soul", and that he intended to broaden and apply reason.
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