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Original:  RNA interference (or RNAi) is the process of using double stranded RNA fragments which bind and interferes with a specific messenger RNA, so that it's not  used to make proteins.
Revised:  RNA interference (or RNAi) is the process of using double stranded RNA fragments which bind and interferes with a specific messenger RNA, so that it's not longer used to make proteins.
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Original:   Several dignitaries, including President A.P.J Abdul Kalam, Vice-President Bhairon Singh Shekhawat, Congress Party President Sonia Gandhi and the Leader of the Opposition L.K Advani paid homage to the mahatma (great soul) at his memorial in Rajghat in New Delhi.
Revised:  100px Several dignitaries, including President A.P.J Abdul Kalam, Vice-President Bhairon Singh Shekhawat, Congress Party President Sonia Gandhi and the Leader of the Opposition L.K Advani paid homage to the mahatma (great soul) at his memorial in Rajghat in New Delhi.
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Original: Indians payed tribute today to the father of the nation, Mohandas Karamchand Mahatma Gandhi on the 137th anniversary of his birth. 100px Several dignitaries, including President A.P.J Abdul Kalam, Vice-President Bhairon Singh Shekhawat, Congress Party President Sonia Gandhi and the Leader of the Opposition L.K Advani paid homage to the mahatma (great soul) at his memorial in Rajghat in New Delhi.
Revised: Indians paid tribute today to the father of the nation, Mohandas Karamchand Mahatma Gandhi on the 137th anniversary of his birth. 100px Several dignitaries, including President A.P.J Abdul Kalam, Vice-President Bhairon Singh Shekhawat, Congress Party President Sonia Gandhi and the Leader of the Opposition L.K Advani paid homage to the mahatma (great soul) at his memorial in Rajghat in New Delhi.
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Original:  Indians paid tribute today to the father of the nation, Mohandas Karamchand Mahatma Gandhi on the 137th anniversary of his birth. 100px Several dignitaries, including President A.P.J Abdul Kalam, Vice-President Bhairon Singh Shekhawat, Congress Party President Sonia Gandhi and the Leader of the Opposition L.K Advani paid homage to the mahatma (great soul) at his memorial in Rajghat in New Delhi.
Revised:  Indians paid tribute today to the father of the nation, Mohandas Karamchand Mahatma Gandhi on the 137th anniversary of his birth. Several dignitaries, including President A.P.J Abdul Kalam, Vice-President Bhairon Singh Shekhawat, Congress Party President Sonia Gandhi and the Leader of the Opposition L.K Advani paid homage to the mahatma (great soul) at his memorial in Rajghat in New Delhi.
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Original:  The cast of the Bollywood film Lage Raho Munnabhai also participated in a paece-march in Mumbai.
Revised:  The cast of the Bollywood film Lage Raho Munnabhai also participated in a peace-march in Mumbai.
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Original:  The event was organised by MP Priya Dutt, and was also participated in by eminent actors such as Shabana Azmi.
Revised:  The event was organised by MP Priya Dutt, and was also attended by eminent actors such as Shabana Azmi.
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Original:  Gandhiji, or Bapu as he is affectionately refered to, was a follower of ahimsa (non-violence) and used it in the freedom-struggle
Revised:  Gandhiji, or Bapu as he is affectionately referred to, was a follower of ahimsa (non-violence) and used it in the freedom-struggle
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Original: Several dignitaries, including President A.P.J Abdul Kalam, Vice-President Bhairon Singh Shekhawat, Congress Party President Sonia Gandhi and the Leader of the Opposition L.K Advani paid homage to the mahatma (great soul) at his memorial in Rajghat in New Delhi.
Revised: Several dignitaries, including President A.P.J Abdul Kalam, Vice-President Bhairon Singh Shekhawat, Congress Party President Sonia Gandhi and the Leader of the Opposition L.K Advani paid homage to the Mahatma (great soul) at his memorial in Rajghat in New Delhi.
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Original:  The hotel would require the demolition of the five properties on Forest and would cause several businesses to telocate or close their doors.
Revised:  The hotel would require the demolition of the five properties on Forest and would cause several businesses to relocate or close their doors.
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Original:  The latest rendering of the Elmwood Village Hotel .
Revised:  Latest rendering of the Elmwood Village Hotel .
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Original:  The latest rendering of the Elmwood Village Hotel .
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Original:  He didn't follow this promise and... for...
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Original:  Isaac had top sustained winds near 60 mph with higher gusts at about 2 pm . Tropical Storm Isaac swirled away from the island and weakened quickly.
Revised:  Isaac had top sustained winds near 60 mph with higher gusts . Tropical Storm Isaac swirled away from the island and weakened quickly.
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Original:  "Isaac has weakened from a hurricane to a tropical storm this morning," the Hurricane Centre in Florida announced in a storm bulletin posted at 11 am.
Revised:  "Isaac has weakened from a hurricane to a tropical storm this morning," the National Hurricane Center in Florida announced in a storm bulletin posted at 11 am.
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Original:  "Isaac has weakened from a hurricane to a tropical storm this morning," the Hurricane Centre in Florida announced in a storm bulletin posted at 11 am.
Revised:  "Isaac has weakened from a hurricane to a tropical storm this morning," the Hurricane Centre in Florida announced in a storm bulletin posted at 11 a.m.
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Original:  " "Once a Category 1 hurricane as it formed in the Atlantic Ocean, Isaac has weakened considerably," said the Canadian Hurricane Centre based in Halifax, Nova Scotia.
Revised:  "Once a Category 1 hurricane as it formed in the Atlantic Ocean, Isaac has weakened considerably," said the Canadian Hurricane Centre based in Halifax, Nova Scotia.
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Original: Hurricane Isaac  downgraded to a tropical storm as it hit Newfoundland today.
Revised: Hurricane Isaac was downgraded to a tropical storm as it hit Newfoundland today.
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Original:  "Isaac has weakened from a hurricane to a tropical storm this morning," the National Hurricane Center in Florida announced in a storm bulletin posted at 11 a.m. "The tropical storm continues racing towards Newfoundland and should cross the Avalon Peninsula  the southeastern region of Newfoundland this afternoon, where a tropical storm warning remains in effect.
Revised:  "Isaac has weakened from a hurricane to a tropical storm this morning," the National Hurricane Center in Florida announced in a storm bulletin posted at 11 a.m. "The tropical storm continues racing towards Newfoundland and should cross the Avalon Peninsula , the southeastern region of Newfoundland this afternoon, where a tropical storm warning remains in effect.
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Original:  " Once a Category 1 hurricane as it formed in the Atlantic Ocean, Isaac has weakened considerably," said the Canadian Hurricane Centre based in Halifax, Nova Scotia.
Revised:  Once a Category 1 hurricane as it formed in the Atlantic Ocean, Isaac has weakened considerably," said the Canadian Hurricane Centre based in Halifax, Nova Scotia.
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Original:  Nobel Prize Committee cited the physicists for their work on the Cosmic Background Explorer (COBE) project.
Revised: The Nobel Prize Committee cited the physicists for their work on the Cosmic Background Explorer (COBE) project.
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Original:  COBE was the first experiment sensitive enough to confirm the predicted temperature variations encoded in the map of the microwave background   
Revised:  COBE was the first experiment sensitive enough to confirm the predicted temperature variations encoded in the map of the microwave background . 
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Original:  The famous map of the CMBE anisotropy formed from data taken by the COBE spacecraft .
Revised:  The famous map of the CMBE anisotropy created using COBE data .
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Original:  Although they measured the approximate temperature of the universe to be about 3.5 degrees Kelvin , their ground-based microwave telescope could not pick out the detail available to COBE
Revised:  Although they measured the approximate temperature of the universe to be about 3.5 Kelvins , their ground-based microwave telescope could not pick out the detail available to COBE
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Original:  Although they measured the approximate temperature of the universe to be about 3.5 Kelvins , their ground-based microwave telescope could not pick out the detail available to COBE
Revised:  Although they measured the approximate temperature of the universe to be about 3.5 kelvins , their ground-based microwave telescope could not pick out the detail available to COBE
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Original:  When Smith did get going, she scored 98 out of 100, having perfect for the first 8 shots. --LauraHale (talk) 08:38, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
Revised:  When Smith did get going, she scored 98 out of 100, having perfect for the first 8 shots. 
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Original:  He said that a slowdown in and the remain as the biggest challenges to the economy.
Revised:  He said that changes in and the remain as the biggest challenges to the economy.
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Original: In spite of this growth, numerous risks still lurk around the corner, said Baliscan .
Revised: In spite of this growth, numerous risks still lurk around the corner, said Balisacan .
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Original:  Analysts, such as economist Eugene Leow of -based , agree that  "There is definitely room to further cut rates if needed  " in order to promote further growth
Revised:  Analysts, such as economist Eugene Leow of -based , agree that , "There is definitely room to further cut rates if needed " in order to promote further growth
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Original:  Analysts, such as economist Eugene Leow of -based , agree that  "There is definitely room to further cut rates if needed  " in order to promote further growth
Revised:  Analysts, such as economist Eugene Leow of -based , agree that "There is definitely room to further cut rates if needed , " in order to promote further growth
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Original: The foreign ministry of the North Korean government had a statement published by the state 's official news agency on Tuesday that, as a result of international pressure, the state would "in the future conduct a nuclear test under the condition where safety is firmly guaranteed".
Revised: The North Korean foreign ministry has published a statement on the state news agency KCNA on Tuesday that, as a result of international pressure, the state would "in the future conduct a nuclear test under the condition where safety is firmly guaranteed".
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Original:  The government of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea, North Korea's official state name, declared itself in possession of nuclear weapons in 2005, but has not yet tested a nuclear weapon, the historically typical way that nuclear states announced their capability to the world.
Revised:  The government of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea, North Korea's official state name, declared itself in possession of nuclear weapons in 2005, but has not yet tested a nuclear weapon, the typical way that nuclear states announced their capability to the world.
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Original:  Western governments have however feared the idea of a nuclear North Korea in particular because of North Korea's history of weapons proliferation, as well as their past history as a state sponsor of terrorism  .
Revised:  Western governments have however feared the idea of a nuclear North Korea , citing a history of weapons proliferation, as well as their past history as a state sponsor of terrorism .
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Original:  Western governments have however feared the idea of a nuclear North Korea in particular because of North Korea's history of weapons proliferation, as well as their past history as a state sponsor of terrorism  .
Revised:  Western governments have however feared the idea of a nuclear North Korea in particular because of North Korea's history of weapons proliferation, as well as their past history as a state sponsor of terrorism ", .
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Original:  While there is no doubt that North Korea has reprocessed plutonium for a bomb, some experts had questioned whether the state had yet actually produced a nuclear weapon , given the state's past history of making gradiouse and aggressive claims about its own successes, and the lack of a successful nuclear test
Revised:  While North Korea is believed to have reprocessed plutonium for a bomb, some experts had questioned whether the state had yet actually produced a nuclear weapon , given the state's past history of making gradiouse and aggressive claims about its own successes, and the lack of a successful nuclear test
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Original:  While there is no doubt that North Korea has reprocessed plutonium for a bomb, some experts had questioned whether the state had yet actually produced a nuclear weapon , given the state's past history of making gradiouse and aggressive claims about its own successes, and the lack of a successful nuclear test
Revised:  While there is no doubt that North Korea has reprocessed plutonium for a bomb, some experts had questioned whether the state had yet actually produced a nuclear weapon 
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Original:  While North Korea is believed to have reprocessed plutonium for a bomb, some experts had questioned whether the state had yet actually produced a nuclear weapon  
Revised:  While North Korea is believed to have reprocessed plutonium for a bomb, some experts had questioned whether the state had yet actually produced a nuclear weapon . 
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Original:  Lundy will be in London for the whole Paralympics, and is scheduled to watch athletics, cycling, powerlifting, rowing, swimming, wheelchair rugby, basketball and tennis.
Revised:  Lundy will be in London for the entire Paralympics, and is scheduled to watch athletics, cycling, powerlifting, rowing, swimming, wheelchair rugby, basketball and tennis.
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Original:  While here, she will get feedback from the Australian Paralympic community regarding government support for disability sport in the country
Revised:  Whilst here, she will get feedback from the Australian Paralympic community regarding government support for disability sport in the country
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Original:  While here, she will get feedback from the Australian Paralympic community regarding government support for disability sport in the country
Revised:  While here, she is to obtain feedback from the Australian Paralympic community regarding government support for disability sport in the country
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Original: Natalie smith at the range|left London, England — This morning , Australia 's Minister for Sport watched and as they qualified for finals in the women's R2-10m air pistol event.
Revised: Natalie smith at the range|left , — This morning , Australia 's Minister for Sport watched and as they qualified for finals in the women's R2-10m air pistol event.
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Original: Natalie smith at the range|left London, England — This morning , Australia 's Minister for Sport watched and as they qualified for finals in the women's R2-10m air pistol event.
Revised: Natalie smith at the range|left London, England — This morning 's Minister for Sport watched and as they qualified for finals in the women's R2-10m air pistol event.
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Original: Natalie smith at the range|left London, England — This morning , Australia 's Minister for Sport watched and as they qualified for finals in the women's R2-10m air pistol event.
Revised: Natalie smith at the range|left London, England — This morning , Australia 's Minister for Sport , , watched and qualifying for the finals in the women's R2-10m air pistol event.
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Original:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 , scoring 99 in  first set of ten shots,  96 in second , 98 in third and 98 in fourth .
Revised:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 ; scoring 99 in first set of ten shots, 96 in second , 98 in third and 98 in fourth .
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Original:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 , scoring 99 in  first set of ten shots,  96 in second , 98 in third and 98 in fourth .
Revised:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 , scoring 99 in her first set of ten shots, 96 in second , 98 in third and 98 in fourth .
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Original:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 , scoring 99 in  first set of ten shots,  96 in second , 98 in third and 98 in fourth .
Revised:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 , scoring 99 in first set of ten shots, and 96 in second , 98 in third and 98 in fourth .
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Original:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 , scoring 99 in  first set of ten shots,  96 in second , 98 in third and 98 in fourth .
Revised:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 , scoring 99 in first set of ten shots, 96 , 98 in third and 98 in fourth .
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Original:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 , scoring 99 in  first set of ten shots,  96 in second , 98 in third and 98 in fourth .
Revised:  Kosmala finished with a score of 391 out of a possible 400 , scoring 99 in first set of ten shots, 96 in second , 98 and 98 in fourth .
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Original:  A few places down, Smith finished just ahead of her teammate with a  score of 393, scoring 98 in her first set , 99 in her second set , 97 in her third set and 98 in her final .
Revised:  A few places down, Smith finished just ahead of her teammate with a combined score of 393, scoring 98 in her first set , 99 in her second set , 97 in her third set and 98 in her final .
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Original:  A few places down, Smith finished just ahead of her teammate with a  score of 393, scoring 98 in her first set , 99 in her second set , 97 in her third set and 98 in her final .
Revised:  A few places down, Smith finished just ahead of her teammate with a score of 393, scoring 98 , 99 in her second set , 97 in her third set and 98 in her final .
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Original:  A few places down, Smith finished just ahead of her teammate with a  score of 393, scoring 98 in her first set , 99 in her second set , 97 in her third set and 98 in her final .
Revised:  A few places down, Smith finished just ahead of her teammate with a score of 393, scoring 98 in her first set , 99 , 97 in her third set and 98 in her final .
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Original:  A few places down, Smith finished just ahead of her teammate with a  score of 393, scoring 98 in her first set , 99 in her second set , 97 in her third set and 98 in her final .
Revised:  A few places down, Smith finished just ahead of her teammate with a score of 393, scoring 98 in her first set , 99 in her second set , 97 and 98 in her final .
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Original:  Besides the Australians, Lundy saw Cuiping Zhang of China set a Paralympic record of 396, and Thai Wasana Keatjaratkul tie the previous record of 393.
Revised:  Alongside the Australians, Lundy saw Cuiping Zhang of China set a Paralympic record of 396, and Thai Wasana Keatjaratkul tie the previous record of 393.
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Original:  Besides the Australians, Lundy saw Cuiping Zhang of China set a Paralympic record of 396, and Thai Wasana Keatjaratkul tie the previous record of 393.
Revised:  Besides the Australians, Lundy saw Cuiping Zhang of set a Paralympic record of 396, and Thai Wasana Keatjaratkul tie the previous record of 393.
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Original:  Besides the Australians, Lundy saw Cuiping Zhang of China set a Paralympic record of 396, and Thai Wasana Keatjaratkul tie the previous record of 393.
Revised:  Besides the Australians, Lundy saw Cuiping Zhang of China set a Paralympic record of 396, and Wasana Keatjaratkul tie the previous record of 393.
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Original:  She also saw Veronika Vadovicova of Slovakia , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee  of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of Germany qualify through to the finals.
Revised:  Veronika Vadovicova of Slovakia , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of Germany qualify through to the finals.
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Original:  She also saw Veronika Vadovicova of Slovakia , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee  of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of Germany qualify through to the finals.
Revised:  She also saw Veronika Vadovicova of , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of Germany qualify through to the finals.
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Original:  She also saw Veronika Vadovicova of Slovakia , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee  of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of Germany qualify through to the finals.
Revised:  She also saw Veronika Vadovicova of Slovakia , Yoojeong Lee of , Yunri Lee of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of Germany qualify through to the finals.
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Original:  She also saw Veronika Vadovicova of Slovakia , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee  of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of Germany qualify through to the finals.
Revised:  She also saw Veronika Vadovicova of Slovakia , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee also of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of Germany qualify through to the finals.
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Original:  She also saw Veronika Vadovicova of Slovakia , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee  of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of Germany qualify through to the finals.
Revised:  She also saw Veronika Vadovicova of Slovakia , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of qualify for the finals.
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Original:  Lundy will be in London for the entire Paralympics, and is scheduled to watch athletics, cycling, powerlifting, rowing, swimming, wheelchair rugby, basketball and tennis.
Revised:  Lundy is expected to be in London for the entire Paralympics, and is scheduled to watch athletics, cycling, powerlifting, rowing, swimming, wheelchair rugby, basketball and tennis.
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Original:  Whilst here, she is to obtain feedback from the Australian Paralympic community regarding government support for disability sport in the country
Revised:  Whilst here, she is to obtain feedback from the Australian Paralympic community regarding government support of sport for the disabled
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Original:  , — This morning 's Minister for Sport, , watched and qualifying for the finals in the women's R2-10m air pistol event.
Revised:  London, England — This morning 's Minister for Sport, , watched and qualifying for the finals in the women's R2-10m air pistol event.
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Original:  Alongside the Australians, Lundy saw Cuiping Zhang of  set a Paralympic record of 396, and  Wasana Keatjaratkul tie the previous record of 393.
Revised:  Alongside the Australians, Lundy saw Cuiping Zhang of set a Paralympic record of 396, and Thai Wasana Keatjaratkul tie the previous record of 393.
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Original:  Veronika Vadovicova of  , Yoojeong Lee of  , Yunri Lee also of South Korea  and Manuela Schmermund of  qualify for the finals.
Revised:  Veronika Vadovicova of , Yoojeong Lee of South Korea , Yunri Lee also of South Korea and Manuela Schmermund of qualify for the finals.
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Original:  Veronika Vadovicova of  , Yoojeong Lee of  , Yunri Lee also of South Korea  and Manuela Schmermund of  qualify for the finals.
Revised:  Veronika Vadovicova of , Yoojeong Lee of , Yunri Lee also of South Korea , and Manuela Schmermund of qualify for the finals.
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