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Original:  "Three required hospitalisation for treatment of injuries that are not life-threatening, and the other six were released after treatment of minor injuries," he commented in an email, noting that production at the Grasberg mine wasn't affected
Revised:  "Three required hospitalisation for treatment of injuries that are not life-threatening, and the other six were released after treatment of minor injuries," he commented in an email, noting that operations at the Grasberg mine wasn't affected
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Original:  She in turn contacted local authorities in the population 252 remote village, who got in touch with the Joint Rescue Coordination Centre, based in Trenton, Ont.
Revised:  She in turn contacted local authorities in the population 252 remote village, who got in touch with the Joint Rescue Coordination Centre, based in Trenton, Ontario
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Original:  The supplies included a tent, stove, and additional communications gear including a locater beacon.
Revised:  The supplies included a tent, stove, and additional communications gear including a locator beacon.
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Original:  The soldier's family has been informed about the former's death  
Revised:  The soldier's family has been informed about the former's death . 
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Original:  This incident occurred when the soldier (who belongs to Third Battalion The Rifles) was on foot patrol .
Revised:  The incident occurred when the soldier (who belongs to Third Battalion The Rifles) was on foot patrol .
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Original:  Lt Col David Wakefield, spokesperson for Task Force Helmand, stated: "He was part of the operations that have been bringing security to the local population.
Revised:  Lieutenant Colonel David Wakefield, spokesperson for Task Force Helmand, stated: "He was part of the operations that have been bringing security to the local population.
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Original:  He further added that "he (the soldier) was on a foot patrol as part of the operations that have been bringing security to the local population in that area."
Revised:  He further added that "he the soldier was on a foot patrol as part of the operations that have been bringing security to the local population in that area."
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Original:  According to them, Peter had earlier stated: "If I'm going to die I want to die a soldier.  
Revised:  According to them, Peter had earlier stated: "If I'm going to die I want to die a soldier. " 
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Original: Facebook is a social networking websiteHuman brains cannot manage more than 150 friendships, even with the advent of social networking websites like Facebook, Bebo and Myspace.
Revised: The logo of social networking website, Facebook. Human brains cannot manage more than 150 friendships, even with the advent of social networking websites like Facebook, Bebo and Myspace.
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Original:  Human brains cannot manage more than 150 friendships , even with the advent of social networking websites like Facebook, Bebo and Myspace.
Revised:  Human brains cannot manage more than 150 friendships – even with the advent of social networking websites like Facebook, Bebo and Myspace.
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Original:  Groups of people tend to be limited to about 150 , as beyond that, social cohesion suffers.
Revised:  Groups of people tend to be limited to about 150 as, beyond that, social cohesion suffers.
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Original:  "  People obviously like the kudos of having hundreds of friends but the reality is that they’re unlikely to be bigger than anyone else’s . "  Another conclusion of his study was that women were better at keeping friendships going on Facebook than men – "girls are much better at maintaining relationships just by talking to each other.
Revised:  " ... People obviously like the kudos of having hundreds of friends but the reality is that they’re unlikely to be bigger than anyone else’s . " Another conclusion of his study was that women were better at keeping friendships going on Facebook than men – "girls are much better at maintaining relationships just by talking to each other.
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Original:  "  People obviously like the kudos of having hundreds of friends but the reality is that they’re unlikely to be bigger than anyone else’s . "  Another conclusion of his study was that women were better at keeping friendships going on Facebook than men – "girls are much better at maintaining relationships just by talking to each other.
Revised:  " People obviously like the kudos of having hundreds of friends but the reality is that they’re unlikely to be bigger than anyone else’s " Another conclusion of his study was that women were better at keeping friendships going on Facebook than men – "girls are much better at maintaining relationships just by talking to each other.
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Original:  "  People obviously like the kudos of having hundreds of friends but the reality is that they’re unlikely to be bigger than anyone else’s . "  Another conclusion of his study was that women were better at keeping friendships going on Facebook than men – "girls are much better at maintaining relationships just by talking to each other.
Revised:  " People obviously like the kudos of having hundreds of friends but the reality is that they’re unlikely to be bigger than anyone else’s . " , he observed. Another conclusion of his study was that women were better at keeping friendships going on Facebook than men – "girls are much better at maintaining relationships just by talking to each other.
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Original:  Boys need to do physical stuff together , " he said .
Revised:  Boys need to do physical stuff together " he said .
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Original:  Boys need to do physical stuff together , " he said .
Revised:  Boys need to do physical stuff together , " .
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Original:  He is a Fellow of the British Academy and and a fellow of Magdalen College, Oxford
Revised:  He is a Fellow of the British Academy and a fellow of Magdalen College, Oxford
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Original: A British murderer, Gordon Park, has today been found dead in his cell at a prison in Lancashire, England.
Revised:  British murderer, Gordon Park, has today been found dead in his cell at a prison in Lancashire, England.
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Original: A British murderer, Gordon Park, has today been found dead in his cell at a prison in Lancashire, England.
Revised: A British murderer, Gordon Park, was found dead today in his cell at a prison in Lancashire, England.
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Original:  Park, who turned 66 today, had been convicted nearly five years ago of the murder of his wife, Carol in 1976.
Revised:  Park, whose 66th birthday was today, was convicted nearly five years ago of the murder of his wife, Carol in 1976.
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Original:  Her body was found over 20 years later in Coniston Water, in the Lake District in northern England, leading to her being dubbed the "Lady in the Lake" by police, after w:Raymond Chandler 's novel.
Revised:  Her body was found over twenty years later in Coniston Water, in the Lake District in northern England, leading to her being dubbed the "Lady in the Lake" by police, after w:Raymond Chandler 's novel.
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Original:  Her body was found over 20 years later in Coniston Water, in the Lake District in northern England, leading to her being dubbed the "Lady in the Lake" by police, after w:Raymond Chandler 's novel.
Revised:  Her body was found over 20 years later in Coniston Water, in the Lake District , Northern England, leading to her being dubbed the "Lady in the Lake" by police, after w:Raymond Chandler 's novel.
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Original:  Her body was found over 20 years later in Coniston Water, in the Lake District in northern England, leading to her being dubbed the "Lady in the Lake" by police, after w:Raymond Chandler 's novel.
Revised:  Her body was found over 20 years later in Coniston Water, in the Lake District in northern England, leading to her being dubbed the "Lady in the Lake" by police, after the Raymond Chandler novel.
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Original:  The Prison Service said that Park was found hanging in his cell at Garth Prison, unconscious, at 8am local time.
Revised:  The Prison Service state Park was found hanging in his cell at Garth Prison, unconscious, at 8am local time.
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Original:  An investigation has been launched by the Prisons and Probation Ombudsman, which investigates deaths in custody , but suicide is suspected.
Revised:  An investigation has been launched by the Prisons and Probation Ombudsman, responsible for investigating deaths in custody , but suicide is suspected.
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Original:  An investigation has been launched by the Prisons and Probation Ombudsman, which investigates deaths in custody , but suicide is suspected.
Revised:  An investigation has been launched by the Prisons and Probation Ombudsman, which investigates deaths in custody ; but, suicide is suspected.
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Original:  His son, Jeremy, who had been fighting for his father's release, said " We  are all completely devastated and still believe his innocence 100\%." Park was jailed for life in January 2005, with a minimum period of 15 years, for his wife's murder after a 10-week trial at Manchester Crown Court.
Revised:  His son, Jeremy, who had been fighting for his father's release, said " w are all completely devastated and still believe his innocence 100\%." Park was jailed for life in January 2005, with a minimum period of 15 years, for his wife's murder after a 10-week trial at Manchester Crown Court.
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Original:  His son, Jeremy, who had been fighting for his father's release, said " We  are all completely devastated and still believe his innocence 100\%." Park was jailed for life in January 2005, with a minimum period of 15 years, for his wife's murder after a 10-week trial at Manchester Crown Court.
Revised:  His son, Jeremy, who had been fighting for his father's release, said " We e are all completely devastated and still believe his innocence 100\%." Park was jailed for life in January 2005, with a minimum period of 15 years, for his wife's murder after a 10-week trial at Manchester Crown Court.
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Original:  His son, Jeremy, who had been fighting for his father's release, said " We  are all completely devastated and still believe his innocence 100\%." Park was jailed for life in January 2005, with a minimum period of 15 years, for his wife's murder after a 10-week trial at Manchester Crown Court.
Revised:  His son, Jeremy, who had been fighting for his father's release, said " We are all completely devastated and still believe his innocence 100\%." Park was jailed for life in January 2005, with a minimum period of fifteen years, for his wife's murder after a 10-week trial at Manchester Crown Court.
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Original:  His son, Jeremy, who had been fighting for his father's release, said " We  are all completely devastated and still believe his innocence 100\%." Park was jailed for life in January 2005, with a minimum period of 15 years, for his wife's murder after a 10-week trial at Manchester Crown Court.
Revised:  His son, Jeremy, who had been fighting for his father's release, said " We are all completely devastated and still believe his innocence 100\%." Park was jailed for life in January 2005, with a minimum period of 15 years, for his wife's murder after a ten-week trial at Manchester Crown Court.
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Original:  He had killed her with an ice axe, then concealed her body into Coniston Water.
Revised:  Carol Park was killed with an ice axe, then concealed her body into Coniston Water.
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Original:  He had killed her with an ice axe, then concealed her body into Coniston Water.
Revised:  He had killed her with an ice axe, then her body concealed in Coniston Water.
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Original:  Related news Man convicted of murdering wife 28 years ago – January 28, 200
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Original:  Iraqi authorities fear that such attacks may have been carried out to disrupt the forthcoming the general elections of Iraq  
Revised:  Iraqi authorities fear that such attacks may have been carried out to disrupt the forthcoming the general elections of Iraq . 
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Original:  The next blast occured at the Babylon hotel, which is often used by the government for meeting.
Revised:  The next blast occurred at the Babylon hotel, which is often used by the government for meeting.
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Original:  It would not benefit any of them.", said he     .
Revised:  It would not benefit any of them.", said he . .
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Original:  Iraqi authorities fear that such attacks may have been carried out to disrupt the forthcoming the general elections of Iraq . Related news Iraq executes "Chemical Ali" – January 25, 201
Revised:  Iraqi authorities fear that such attacks may have been carried out to disrupt the forthcoming the general elections of Iraq Related news Iraq executes "Chemical Ali" – January 25, 201
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Original:  Iraqi authorities fear that such attacks may have been carried out to disrupt the forthcoming the general elections of Iraq . Related news Iraq executes "Chemical Ali" – January 25, 201
Revised:  Iraqi authorities fear that such attacks may have been carried out to disrupt the forthcoming the general elections of Iraq . 
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Original: A person who prefers using their right hand will have more a dominant left hemisphere of the brain, which is the part of the brain for language skills.
Revised: A person who prefers using their right hand will have a more dominant left hemisphere of the brain, which is the part of the brain for language skills.
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Original:  Ali Hassan al-Majid at a hearing in 2004Ali Hassan al-Majid, a cousin of Saddam Hussein who had been convicted in Iraq of genocide and crimes against humanity, has today been executed, according to an Iraqi government spokesman.
Revised:  Ali Hassan al-Majid at a hearing in 2004. Ali Hassan al-Majid, a cousin of Saddam Hussein who had been convicted in Iraq of genocide and crimes against humanity, has today been executed, according to an Iraqi government spokesman.
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Original:  Ali Hassan al-Majid, a cousin of Saddam Hussein who had been convicted in Iraq of genocide and crimes against humanity, has today been executed, according to an Iraqi government spokesman.
Revised:  Ali Hassan al-Majid, a cousin of Saddam Hussein convicted in Iraq of genocide and crimes against humanity, has today been executed, according to an Iraqi government spokesman.
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Original:  It was unclear whether three bomb attacks in the centre of Baghdad earlier today were linked to today's execution.
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Original:  Among other Middle Eastern countries sending help to Haiti are Israel and the United Arab Emirates  .
Revised:  Among other Middle Eastern countries sending help to Haiti are Israel , the United Arab Emirates .
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Original:  The Organisation of the Islamic Conference, meanwhile  has encouraged Muslim countries to give money to Haiti
Revised:  The Organisation of the Islamic Conference, meanwhile , has encouraged Muslim countries to give money to Haiti
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Original: "The kingdom, by instruction of King Abdullah, is donating 50 million dollars [...] to assist the Haitian people," said spokesman Osama Nugali to AFP.
Revised: "The kingdom, by instruction of King Abdullah, is donating 50 million dollars [...] to assist the Haitian people," spokesman Osama Nugali to AFP.
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Original: "The kingdom, by instruction of King Abdullah, is donating 50 million dollars [...] to assist the Haitian people," said spokesman Osama Nugali to AFP.
Revised: "The kingdom, by instruction of King Abdullah, is donating 50 million dollars [...] to assist the Haitian people," said spokesman Osama Nugali told AFP.
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Original:  The Organisation of the Islamic Conference, meanwhile, has encouraged Muslim countries to give money to Haiti
Revised:  The Organisation of the Islamic Conference, meanwhile, is encouraging Muslim countries to give money to Haiti
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Original:  Bill Gates , the world's richest man and chairman of Microsoft, has said that he thinks it could take several more years for the global economy to rebound after the recent recession, which most economists believe began in late 2008. "Taxes are going to have to go up and entitlements are going to have to be moderated," he added.
Revised:  Bill Gates , the world's richest man and chairman of Microsoft, has said that he thinks it could take several more years for the global economy to rebound after the recent recession, which most economists believe began in late 2008. "Taxes are going to have to go up and entitlements are going to have to be moderated," he added.
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Original:  "Still, the resale market showed resilience in the second half of 2009, and the expansion and extension of the tax credit to April 30 could boost purchases during the spring selling season," he said    .
Revised:  "Still, the resale market showed resilience in the second half of 2009, and the expansion and extension of the tax credit to April 30 could boost purchases during the spring selling season," he said . .
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Original:  According to Campbell, autopsies will be performed on two of the fifteen dead whales  
Revised:  According to Campbell, autopsies will be performed on two of the fifteen dead whales . 
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Original:  An alarm was called out at about 06.30 local time 
Revised:  An alarm was called out at about 06.30 local time .
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Original: PRS for Music logo PRS for Music is the UK's music royalty collection society for copyright holders.
Revised: right PRS for Music is the UK's music royalty collection society for copyright holders.
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Original: right PRS for Music is the UK's music royalty collection society for copyright holders.
Revised: right PRS for Music is the UK's music royalty collection society tasked with working on behalf of copyright holders.
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Original:  Founded in 1914,  PRS is a non-profit making organisation with 350,000 UK businesses holding a PRS license.
Revised:  Founded in 1914, the PRS is a non-profit making organisation with 350,000 UK businesses holding a PRS license.
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Original:  Founded in 1914,  PRS is a non-profit making organisation with 350,000 UK businesses holding a PRS license.
Revised:  Founded in 1914, PRS is a non-profit organisation with 350,000 UK businesses holding a PRS license.
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Original:  So, if a cover version of a song is played on UK radio, PRS collect a fee on behalf of the original writer and publisher, while PPL collect a fee on behalf of the record company of the cover.
Revised:  So, if a cover version of a song is played on UK radio, PRS collect a fee on behalf of the original writer and publisher, whilst PPL collect a fee on behalf of the record company of the cover.
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Original:  The society works in conjunction with PPL , a separate organisation which collects fees for the owners of the copyright . So, if a cover version of a song is played on UK radio, PRS collect a fee on behalf of the original writer and publisher, whilst PPL collect a fee on behalf of the record company of the cover.
Revised:  The society works in conjunction with PPL which collects fees for the owners of the copyright . So, if a cover version of a song is played on UK radio, PRS collect a fee on behalf of the original writer and publisher, whilst PPL collect a fee on behalf of the record company of the cover.
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Original:  The society works in conjunction with PPL , a separate organisation which collects fees for the owners of the copyright . So, if a cover version of a song is played on UK radio, PRS collect a fee on behalf of the original writer and publisher, whilst PPL collect a fee on behalf of the record company of the cover.
Revised:  The society works in conjunction with PPL , a separate organisation which collects fees on behalf of the copyright . So, if a cover version of a song is played on UK radio, PRS collect a fee on behalf of the original writer and publisher, whilst PPL collect a fee on behalf of the record company of the cover.
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Original:  We believed that music had become a much larger part of the YouTube service and that YouTube/Google should reflect the increased use of our members ’ creative talent in the amount they paid.
Revised:  We believed that music had become a much larger part of the YouTube service and that YouTube/Google should reflect the increased use of our members ' creative talent in the amount they paid.
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Original:  Paul Campbell in a recent interview with us said the following: "PRS has a barmy standard contract for using their members ’ music online.
Revised:  Paul Campbell in a recent interview with us said the following: "PRS has a barmy standard contract for using their members ' music online.
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Original:  It requires us to pay them a fixed percentage of ALL revenue from that website – whether or not the revenue is derived from their members ’ work.
Revised:  It requires us to pay them a fixed percentage of ALL revenue from that website – whether or not the revenue is derived from their members ' work.
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Original:  So if we had 100,000 songs from non-PRS artists on amazingtunes.com, and one song from a PRS artist, we ’ d have to pay them a percentage of the revenue from ALL 100,000 songs.
Revised:  So if we had 100,000 songs from non-PRS artists on amazingtunes.com, and one song from a PRS artist, we ' d have to pay them a percentage of the revenue from ALL 100,000 songs.
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Original:  I.e., we ’ d have to take money out of the pockets out of non-PRS artists to pay to PRS.
Revised:  I.e., we ' d have to take money out of the pockets out of non-PRS artists to pay to PRS.
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Original:  Similarly a writer of musician may be ‘unsigned’ by that doesn’t mean that they shouldn ’ t earn from their music when it is used by others.
Revised:  Similarly a writer of musician may be 'unsigned' by that doesn’t mean that they shouldn ’ t earn from their music when it is used by others.
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Original:  Similarly a writer of musician may be ‘unsigned’ by that doesn’t mean that they shouldn ’ t earn from their music when it is used by others.
Revised:  Similarly a writer of musician may be ‘unsigned’ by that doesn’t mean that they shouldn ' t earn from their music when it is used by others.
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Original: British prime minister Gordon Brown said today that a conference on the war in Afghanistan, due to take place in two one-day sessions in London this week, will announce an expansion of the British military presence in Afghanistan.
Revised: British prime minister Gordon Brown said today that a conference on the war in Afghanistan, due to take place over two one-day sessions in London this week, will announce an expansion of the British military presence in Afghanistan.
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Original:  The conference will also  discuss the situation in Yemen 
Revised:  Brown says that he expects Afghan president Hamid Karzai to announce new security measures and initiatives regarding corruption in his government. He said that "President Karzai and his ministers, with the addition of the armed forces and the police have got to show that they can take security control of their country. That is what our aim is and therefore anything that suggests that the government of Afghanistan cannot deal with its corruption problems is something that we must be worried about." discuss the situation in Yemen 
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Original:  Nobody was killed when the Tupolev Tu-154 crash-landed and caught fire on the runway    
Revised:  Nobody was killed when the Tupolev Tu-154 crash-landed and caught fire on the runway . 
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