wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Stronach was in Montreal on Thursday for an international conference on global poverty and turned the joke back on Klein . "Ralph should put his money where his mouth is and buy a whole bunch of bednets to save kids from malaria in Africa."
Revised:  Stronach was in Montreal on Thursday for an international conference on global poverty and defended herself from the comment . "Ralph should put his money where his mouth is and buy a whole bunch of bednets to save kids from malaria in Africa."
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Original:  "I wasn't suprised that she crossed over to the Liberals.
Revised:  "I wasn't surprised that she crossed over to the Liberals.
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Original:   Reagan died at 93 years and 120 days in June, 2004.
Revised:  Former record-holder Reagan died at 93 years and 120 days in June, 2004.
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Original: Insulin production has been discovered in the brain and linked to Alzheimer's disease , potentially changing how the illness is viewed and treated.
Revised:  production has been discovered in the brain and linked to Alzheimer's disease , potentially changing how the illness is viewed and treated.
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Original: Insulin production has been discovered in the brain and linked to Alzheimer's disease , potentially changing how the illness is viewed and treated.
Revised: Insulin production has been discovered in the brain and linked to , potentially changing how the illness is viewed and treated.
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Original:  While insulin resistance , a characteristic of diabetes , is linked with neurodegeneration, the new finding provides a strong connection between diabetes and Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  While , a characteristic of diabetes , is linked with neurodegeneration, the new finding provides a strong connection between diabetes and Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  While insulin resistance , a characteristic of diabetes , is linked with neurodegeneration, the new finding provides a strong connection between diabetes and Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  While insulin resistance , a characteristic of , is linked with neurodegeneration, the new finding provides a strong connection between diabetes and Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  A government spokesman has only confirmed the rebels' activity but  not the seizure of the town   
Revised:  A government spokesman has only confirmed the rebels' activity but not the seizure of the town . 
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Original:  Both towns claimed by the rebels are near eastern Chad and Sudan's western Darfur region    [   
Revised:  Both towns claimed by the rebels are near eastern Chad and Sudan's western Darfur region . [ 
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Original:  Both towns claimed by the rebels are near eastern Chad and Sudan's western Darfur region    [   
Revised:  Both towns claimed by the rebels are near eastern Chad and Sudan's western Darfur region [a 
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Original:  Whether thisis true or not is unknown . Saboune said nothing about the death toll, but he did reveal that the  UFDR's forces, currently located 750 km north of the Bangui, were ready to capture another two towns.
Revised:  Whether thisis true or not is unknown . Saboune said nothing about the death toll, but he did reveal that the The UFDR's forces, currently located 750 km north of the Bangui, were ready to capture another two towns.
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Original:  Whether thisis true or not is unknown . Saboune said nothing about the death toll, but he did reveal that the  UFDR's forces, currently located 750 km north of the Bangui, were ready to capture another two towns.
Revised:  Whether thisis true or not is unknown . Saboune said nothing about the death toll, but he did reveal that the UFDR's forces, currently located 750 km north of the Bangui, are thought to be ready to capture another two towns.
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Original: 200px Rebels known as the Union of Democratic Forces for Unity (UDFU) or the UFDR with its French initials in the Central African Republic (CAR) claim to have taken over another town in the CAR after a two-week long offensive.
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Original:  The rebels told a BBC reporter via satellite telephone that they had captured Ouadda-Djalle, an isolated settlement 200 km west of the border with Sudan.
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Original:  The UFDR claims their reasons for rebeling are to fight against corruption and mismanagement under CAR President Francois Bozize's handling, who seized power in a 2003 coup.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The French military has been requested to come and stop the rebellion from getting out of control.
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Original:  "We captured this town in the early hours of the morning this Friday after%DIFDELCMD < [%%% a fierce battle with the regular army," Abakar Saboune, one of the rebels said.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% a fierce battle with the regular army," Abakar Saboune, one of the rebels said.
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Original:  "We captured this town in the early hours of the morning this Friday after%DIFDELCMD < [%%% a fierce battle with the regular army," Abakar Saboune, one of the rebels said.
Revised:  "We captured this town in the early hours of the morning this Friday after%DIFDELCMD < [%%% fierce battle with the regular army," Abakar Saboune, one of the rebels said.
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Original:  "We captured this town in the early hours of the morning this Friday after%DIFDELCMD < [%%% a fierce battle with the regular army," Abakar Saboune, one of the rebels said.
Revised:  "We captured this town in the early hours of the morning this Friday after%DIFDELCMD < [%%% a 
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Original:  The UFDR's forces, currently located 750 km north of the Bangui, are thought to be ready to capture another two towns.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The rebels requested that a national conference be held to discuss the matter of sharing power, but the government has, at this point, not responded
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Original: The high speed internet Orcon wishes to use is called VDSL2+ which is able to go 100 megabits per second , this is an upgrade of Telecoms current technology, ADSL 2+.
Revised: The high speed internet Orcon wishes to use is called VDSL2+ which is able to go 100 megabits per second ; this is an upgrade of Telecoms current technology, ADSL 2+.
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Original:  this is an upgrade of Telecoms current technology, ADSL 2+.
Revised:  this is an upgrade of Telecom's current technology, ADSL 2+.
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Original: The Iranian (FNA) today apologised over an article it reproduced Friday, originally written by US satirical news website on Monday , September 24.
Revised: The Iranian (FNA) today apologised over an article it reproduced Friday, originally written by US satirical news website on Monday September 24.
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Original:  While the FNA referenced The Daily Telegraph  and the order of the mistakes was changed from the original article, the wording was reproduced verbatim, excluding one omitted sentence under the subheading ' and hunting mark II' which reads: "Campbell, who is also the presenter of the BBC's flagship programme for , apologised profusely for the mistake."
Revised:  While the FNA referenced The Daily Telegraph '' and the order of the mistakes was changed from the original article, the wording was reproduced verbatim, excluding one omitted sentence under the subheading ' and hunting mark II' which reads: "Campbell, who is also the presenter of the BBC's flagship programme for , apologised profusely for the mistake."
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Original: In Iran, homosexuality is a criminal offence which can carry a penalty of or . Just over five years ago, when he participated in a debate at in New York, New York, Ahmadinejad stated "In Iran we don't have homosexuals like in your country".
Revised: In Iran, homosexuality is a criminal offence which can carry a penalty of or . Just over five years ago, when he participated in a debate at in New York, New York, Ahmadinejad said: "In Iran we don't have homosexuals like in your country".
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Original:  The FNA    copied The Onion'''s article verbatim and in its entirety, excluding part of a sentence saying Ahmadinejad was "a man who has repeatedly and has had numerous political prisoners executed".
Revised:  The FNA copied The Onion'''s article verbatim and in its entirety, save for part of a sentence saying Ahmadinejad was "a man who has repeatedly and has had numerous political prisoners executed".
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Original:  However, the Iranian news service did not attribute The Onion as its source.
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Original:  While the FNA referenced The Daily Telegraph '' and the order of the mistakes was changed from the original article, the wording was reproduced verbatim, excluding one omitted sentence under the subheading ' and hunting mark II' which reads: "Campbell, who is also the presenter of the BBC's flagship programme for , apologised profusely for the mistake."
Revised:  While the FNA referenced The Daily Telegraph and the order of the mistakes was changed from the original article, the wording was reproduced verbatim, excluding one omitted sentence under the subheading ' and hunting mark II' which reads: "Campbell, who is also the presenter of the BBC's flagship programme for , apologised profusely for the mistake."
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Original:  While the FNA referenced The Daily Telegraph '' and the order of the mistakes was changed from the original article, the wording was reproduced verbatim, excluding one omitted sentence under the subheading ' and hunting mark II' which reads: "Campbell, who is also the presenter of the BBC's flagship programme for , apologised profusely for the mistake." 
Revised:  While the FNA referenced The Daily Telegraph and the order of the mistakes was changed from the original article, the wording was reproduced verbatim, excluding one omitted sentence under the subheading ' and hunting mark II' which reads: "Campbell, who is also the presenter of the BBC's flagship programme for , apologised profusely for the mistake." 
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Original:  The Iranian (FNA) today apologised over an article it reproduced Friday, originally written by US satirical news website on Monday September 24.
Revised:  The Iranian (FNA) yesterday apologised over an article it reproduced Friday, originally written by US satirical news website on Monday September 24.
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Original: The FNA's error made international headlines, including in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, India  and Australia.
Revised: The FNA's error made international headlines, including in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, India , and Australia.
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Original:  The FNA statement released yesterday went on to say "[a]ctive and well-known media occasionally make mistakes, and no media is an exception to this rule", before going to provide a list of errors made by such publications as , and British newspaper , as well as television broadcasters like the BBC, ITV  and .
Revised:  The FNA statement released yesterday went on to say "[a]ctive and well-known media occasionally make mistakes, and no media is an exception to this rule", before going to provide a list of errors made by such publications as , and British newspaper , as well as television broadcasters like the BBC, ITV , and .
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Original: Three Moroccans, who were formerly held in extrajudicical detention in the United States Guantanamo Bay detainee camps, in Cuba, Mohamed Souleymani Laalami, Najib Lahssini and Mohammed Ouali, were sentenced on Friday November 10th.
Revised: Three Moroccans, who were formerly held in extrajudicial detention in the United States Guantanamo Bay detainee camps, in Cuba, Mohamed Souleymani Laalami, Najib Lahssini and Mohammed Ouali, were sentenced on Friday November 10th.
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Original:  During Mohamed Souleymani Laalami's Tribunal he was accused of attending the al Farouq training camp, a military training camp that is alleged to have trained terrorists, including 9-11 hijackers, Richard Ried, "the sshoe bomber", Ahmed Ressam, "the millenium bomber".
Revised:  During Mohamed Souleymani Laalami's Tribunal he was accused of attending the al Farouq training camp, a military training camp that is alleged to have trained terrorists, including 9-11 hijackers, Richard Ried, "the shoe bomber", Ahmed Ressam, "the millenium bomber".
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Original:  During Mohamed Souleymani Laalami's Tribunal he was accused of attending the al Farouq training camp, a military training camp that is alleged to have trained terrorists, including 9-11 hijackers, Richard Ried, "the sshoe bomber", Ahmed Ressam, "the millenium bomber".
Revised:  During Mohamed Souleymani Laalami's Tribunal he was accused of attending the al Farouq training camp, a military training camp that is alleged to have trained terrorists, including 9-11 hijackers, Richard Ried, "the sshoe bomber", Ahmed Ressam, "the millennium bomber".
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Original:  Laalami, in turn, alleged that he had beaten, and threatend with death, during his interrogations in Afghanistan, to force him to falsely confess to please his interrogators.
Revised:  Laalami, in turn, alleged that he had beaten, and threatened with death, during his interrogations in Afghanistan, to force him to falsely confess to please his interrogators.
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Original:  The US Department of Defense was forced to release an official list of the names of all the Guantanamo detainees who had been held in military custody, Although all the press reports describe Mohammed Ouali as a former Guantanamo detainee, there is no detainee named Mohammed Ouali on the official list of detainee names .
Revised:  The US Department of Defense was forced to release an official list of the names of all the Guantanamo detainees who had been held in military custody, Although all the press reports describe Mohammed Ouali as a former Guantanamo detainee, there is no detainee named Mohammed Ouali on the official list of detainee names 
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Original: During Mohamed Souleymani Laalami's Tribunal he was accused of attending the al Farouq training camp, a military training camp that is alleged to have trained terrorists, including 9-11 hijackers, Richard Ried , "the shoe bomber", Ahmed Ressam, "the millennium bomber".
Revised: During Mohamed Souleymani Laalami's Tribunal he was accused of attending the al Farouq training camp, a military training camp that is alleged to have trained terrorists, including 9-11 hijackers, Richard Reid , "the shoe bomber", Ahmed Ressam, "the millennium bomber".
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Original: Three Moroccans, who were formerly held in extrajudicial detention in the United States Guantanamo Bay detainee camps, in Cuba, Mohamed Souleymani Laalami, Najib Lahssini and Mohammed Ouali, were sentenced on Friday November 10th.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Najib Lahssini and Mohammed Ouali were convicted of falsifying documents, and were sentenced to three years imprisonment.
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Original:  Lahssini chose not to participate in his Combatant Status Review Tribunal.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The US Department of Defense was forced to release an official list of the names of all the Guantanamo detainees who had been held in military custody, Although all the press reports describe Mohammed Ouali as a former Guantanamo detainee, there is no detainee named Mohammed Ouali on the official list of detainee names
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Original:  that a February 12th visit from Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld coincided with the men's transfer;
Revised:  that a February 12 visit from Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld coincided with the men's transfer;
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Original:  Souleymani denied attending the the camp.
Revised:  Souleymani denied attending the camp.
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Original:  Meena, the founder of the Revolutionary Association of the Women of Afghanistan (RAWA) has been listed among the  60 heroes in the " inspirations" category besides Mother Teresa, Dalai Lama, Kang Chol Hwan and others . Aryn Baker write in her note about Meena: "Although she was only 30 when she died, Meena had already planted the seeds of an Afghan women's rights movement based on the power of knowledge.
Revised:  Meena, the founder of the Revolutionary Association of the Women of Afghanistan (RAWA) has been listed among the " 60 heroes in the " inspirations" category besides Mother Teresa, Dalai Lama, Kang Chol Hwan and others . Aryn Baker write in her note about Meena: "Although she was only 30 when she died, Meena had already planted the seeds of an Afghan women's rights movement based on the power of knowledge.
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Original:  Meena, the founder of the Revolutionary Association of the Women of Afghanistan (RAWA) has been listed among the  60 heroes in the " inspirations" category besides Mother Teresa, Dalai Lama, Kang Chol Hwan and others . Aryn Baker write in her note about Meena: "Although she was only 30 when she died, Meena had already planted the seeds of an Afghan women's rights movement based on the power of knowledge.
Revised:  Meena, the founder of the Revolutionary Association of the Women of Afghanistan (RAWA) has been listed among the 60 heroes in the " along with Mother Teresa, Dalai Lama, Kang Chol Hwan and others . Aryn Baker write in her note about Meena: "Although she was only 30 when she died, Meena had already planted the seeds of an Afghan women's rights movement based on the power of knowledge.
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Original:  Meena, the founder of the Revolutionary Association of the Women of Afghanistan (RAWA) has been listed among the  60 heroes in the " inspirations" category besides Mother Teresa, Dalai Lama, Kang Chol Hwan and others . Aryn Baker write in her note about Meena: "Although she was only 30 when she died, Meena had already planted the seeds of an Afghan women's rights movement based on the power of knowledge.
Revised:  Meena, the founder of the Revolutionary Association of the Women of Afghanistan (RAWA) has been listed among the 60 heroes in the " inspirations" category besides Mother Teresa, Dalai Lama, Kang Chol Hwan and others . Aryn Baker writes in her profile of Meena: "Although she was only 30 when she died, Meena had already planted the seeds of an Afghan women's rights movement based on the power of knowledge.
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Original:  Meena established RAWA in 1977 and almost after 10 years of struggle for women's rights, she was assassinated in Queeta of Pakistan on Feb.4, 1987  by the agents of KHAD (Afghanistan branch of KGB)
Revised:  Meena established RAWA in 1977 and almost after 10 years of struggle for women's rights, she was assassinated in Queeta of Pakistan on Feb.4, 1987 allegedly by the agents of KHAD (Afghanistan branch of KGB)
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Original: Twenty-seven years old Robin Parkircher arrived to Israel today to apologize to Holocaust survivors for his grandfather's behavior.
Revised: Twenty-seven year old Robin Parkircher arrived to Israel today to apologize to Holocaust survivors for his grandfather's behavior.
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Original:  The young German man has a long way to go , yet .
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Original: Twenty-seven year old Robin Parkircher arrived to Israel today to apologize to Holocaust survivors for his grandfather's behavior.
Revised: Twenty-seven year old Robin Parkircher arrived in Israel today to apologize to Holocaust survivors for his grandfather's behavior.
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Original:  Parkircher's grandfather was an SS guard in women's Nazi concentration camp near Bremen, Germany, where over eight hundred women were incarcerated.
Revised:  Parkircher's grandfather was an SS guard in a Nazi concentration camp near Bremen, Germany, where over eight hundred women were incarcerated.
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Original:  After the discovery, the younger Parkircher decided he should look for the camp survivors and ask  their forgiveness.
Revised:  After the discovery, the younger Parkircher decided he should look for the camp survivors and ask for their forgiveness.
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Original:  After months-long search, he discovered traces of survivors in Nordia senior citizen home in central Israel.
Revised:  After months-long search, he discovered survivors in Nordia senior citizen home in central Israel.
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Original: Twenty-seven year old Robin Parkircher arrived in Israel today to apologize to Holocaust survivors for his grandfather's behavior.
Revised: Twenty-seven year old Robin Parkircher arrived in Israel today to apologize to survivors of the (alleged) Holocaust for his grandfather's behavior.
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Original: Twenty-seven year old Robin Parkircher arrived in Israel today to apologize to survivors of the (alleged) Holocaust for his grandfather's behavior.
Revised: Twenty-seven year old Robin Parkircher arrived in Israel today to apologize to Holocaust survivors for his grandfather's behavior.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He is scheduled to stay in Israel for another twelve days, to visit additional survivors of the concentration camp
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Original: Twenty-seven year old Robin Parkircher arrived in Israel today to apologize to Holocaust survivors for his grandfather's behavior.
Revised: 27-year-old Robin Parkircher arrived in Israel today to apologize to Holocaust survivors for his grandfather's behavior.
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Original: Opposition MP's are calling on the Conservative government to allow Governor General Michaelle Jean visit Kandahar, Afghanistan.
Revised: Opposition MPs are calling on the Conservative government to allow Governor General Michaelle Jean visit Kandahar, Afghanistan.
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Original:  Prime Minister Stephen Harper went to Afghanistan earlier this year, then followed Defence Minister Gordon O'Connor and Forign Minister Peter MacKay going to Afghanistan in support for the Canadian troops.
Revised:  Prime Minister Stephen Harper went to Afghanistan earlier this year, then followed Defence Minister Gordon O'Connor and Foreign Minister Peter MacKay going to Afghanistan in support for the Canadian troops.
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Original:  Earlier this year, Jean told General Rick Hillier , chief of the Defence Staff of the Canadian Forces, that she wanted to visit the troops in Kandahar to witness some of the provincial reconstruction teams at work outside the Canadian base and meet with local citizens.
Revised:  Earlier this year, Jean told Hillier that she wanted to visit the troops in Kandahar to witness some of the provincial reconstruction teams at work outside the Canadian base and meet with local citizens.
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Original:  New Democratic Party defence critic Dawn Black also supports the idea on Jean going to Afghanistan.
Revised:  New Democratic Party defence critic also supports the idea on Jean going to Afghanistan.
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Original:  There are entertainers going in!" Jean was shedueled to go to the country during the Operation Medusa in early September, when Canadians waged a major offensive against insurgents.
Revised:  There are entertainers going in!" Jean was shedueled to go to the country during the in early September, when Canadians waged a major offensive against insurgents.
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Original:  Jade stadium would be able to host the final if they were to include temporary seating to accommodate 60,000 people, required by the International Rugby Board (IRB).
Revised:  Jade Stadium would be able to host the final if they were to include temporary seating to accommodate 60,000 people, required by the International Rugby Board (IRB).
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