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Original: A  man and two children were found dead Tuesday morning in a residence located at Fort Hood, a US Army base in Texas.
Revised: A US soldier salutes the American flag at Fort Hood, Texas (file photo)A man and two children were found dead Tuesday morning in a residence located at Fort Hood, a US Army base in Texas.
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Original:  Officials , did note, however, that no further threats exist to the community  .
Revised:  Officials did note, however, that no further threats exist to the community .
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Original:  Officials , did note, however, that no further threats exist to the community  .
Revised:  Officials , did note, however, that "no further threat to the community .
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Original:  In 2009, Major shot and killed 13 people and wounded 30 others at the base's Readiness Processing Center  
Revised:  In 2009, Major shot and killed 13 people and wounded 30 others at the base's Readiness Processing Center . 
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Original:  Rhode Island State Police claim to have arrested a man who has the highest blood-alcohol level ever recorded in a person who wasn't dead.
Revised:  Rhode Island State Police arrested a man who has the highest blood-alcohol level ever recorded in a person who wasn't dead.
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Original:  Rhode Island State Police claim to have arrested a man who has the highest blood-alcohol level ever recorded in a person who wasn't dead.
Revised:  Rhode Island State Police claim to have arrested a man in Providence, Rhode Island who they claim had the highest blood-alcohol level ever recorded in a person who wasn't dead.
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Original:  Rhode Island State Police claim to have arrested a man who has the highest blood-alcohol level ever recorded in a person who wasn't dead.
Revised:  Rhode Island State Police claim to have arrested a man who has the highest blood-alcohol level ever recorded in a person who is still alive.
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Original:  Steven O'Donnell of the state police, "The person's lucky they survived." (sic)
Revised:  Steven O'Donnell of the state police, "The person's lucky they survived." 
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Original:  Among other tasks, he will be working on paying back the £25bn loan to the Bank of England by 2010, and reducing its mortgage lending from £100bn to £50bn  
Revised:  Among other tasks, he will be working on paying back the £25bn loan to the Bank of England by 2010, and reducing its mortgage lending from £100bn to £50bn . 
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Original:  Kuipers, who has been with Northern Rock for 20 years  will be replaced at the beginning of October.
Revised:  Kuipers, who has been with Northern Rock for 20 years , will be replaced at the beginning of October.
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Original:  Among other tasks, he will be working on paying back the £25bn loan to the Bank of England by 2010, and reducing its mortgage lending from £100bn to £50bn   .
Revised:  Among other tasks, he will be working on paying back the £25bn loan from the Bank of England by 2010, and reducing its mortgage lending from £100bn to £50bn .
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Original:  Among other tasks, he will be working on paying back the £25bn loan to the Bank of England by 2010, and reducing its mortgage lending from £100bn to £50bn   .
Revised:  Among other tasks, he will be working on paying back the £25bn loan to the Bank of England by 2010, and reducing its mortgage lending from £100bn to £50bn . .
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Original:  Northern Rock has appointed the vice chairman of Barclays as its new chief executive.
Revised: British bank Northern Rock has appointed the vice chairman of Barclays as its new chief executive.
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Original:  He is to earn £700,000 a year, plus £400,000 in compensation from losses due to his moving.
Revised:  He is to earn £700,000 per year, plus £400,000 in compensation from losses due to his moving.
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Original:  Along with a bonus, he is expect to earn £1.5 million in his first year, making him Britain's highest paid public servant.
Revised:  Including a bonus, he is expect to earn £1.5 million in his first year, making him Britain's highest paid public servant.
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Original:  Along with a bonus, he is expect to earn £1.5 million in his first year, making him Britain's highest paid public servant.
Revised:  Along with a bonus, he is expected to earn £1.5 million in his first year, making him Britain's highest paid public servant.
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Original:  Among other tasks, he will be working on paying back the £25bn loan  from the Bank of England by 2010, and reducing its mortgage lending from £100bn to £50bn.
Revised:  Among other tasks, he will be working to pay back the £25bn loan from the Bank of England by 2010, and reducing its mortgage lending from £100bn to £50bn.
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Original:  Gary Hoffman will replace Andy Kuipers following 26 years at Barclays , with two spent as vice chairman  . Kuipers, who has been with Northern Rock for 20 years, will be replaced at the beginning of October.
Revised:  After 26 years at Barclays , with two spent as vice chairman . Kuipers, who has been with Northern Rock for 20 years, will be replaced at the beginning of October.
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Original:  Gary Hoffman will replace Andy Kuipers following 26 years at Barclays , with two spent as vice chairman  . Kuipers, who has been with Northern Rock for 20 years, will be replaced at the beginning of October.
Revised:  Gary Hoffman will replace Andy Kuipers following 26 years at Barclays —the last two of which were as vice chairman . Kuipers, who has been with Northern Rock for 20 years, will be replaced at the beginning of October.
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Original:  Gary Hoffman will replace Andy Kuipers following 26 years at Barclays , with two spent as vice chairman  . Kuipers, who has been with Northern Rock for 20 years, will be replaced at the beginning of October.
Revised:  Gary Hoffman will replace Andy Kuipers following 26 years at Barclays , with two spent as vice chairman —Gary Hoffman will replace Andy Kuipers . Kuipers, who has been with Northern Rock for 20 years, will be replaced at the beginning of October.
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Original:  With share prices plummeting as a result of issues in the U.S. sub-prime mortgage market, an unprecedented crisis struck one of the UK's largest banks.
Revised:  With share prices plummeting as a result of issues in the United States sub-prime mortgage market, an unprecedented crisis struck one of the UK's largest banks.
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Original:  The reward is equivelant to US$43,900 and is triple what was initially offered after the Monday attack.
Revised:  The reward is equivelant to US$43,900 and is triple the amount initially offered after the Monday attack.
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Original:  Police are now asking anyone who used a route 54 bus  6:00 and 8:30 a.m. that day to come forward
Revised:  Police are now asking anyone who used a route 54 bus between 6:00 and 8:30 a.m. that day to come forward
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Original:  The reward is equivelant to US$43,900 and is triple the amount initially offered after the Monday attack.
Revised:  The reward is triple the amount initially offered after the Monday attack.
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Original: Chinese police are offering a reward of 300,000 Yuan (US$43,900) over twin bombings on morning bus services earlier this week.
Revised: Chinese police are offering a reward of 300,000 yuan (US$43,900) over twin bombings on morning bus services earlier this week.
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Original: Beijing has set up three specified zones throughout the city, for protesting the w: 2008 Summer Olympics.
Revised: Beijing has set up three specified zones throughout the city, for protesting the 2008 Summer Olympics.
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Original:  Shijie (Beijing World Park), Zizhuyuan (Purple Bamboo Park),  Ritan, three public parks, have been selected as the locations for the "legal" protests.
Revised:  Shijie (Beijing World Park), Zizhuyuan (Purple Bamboo Park), and Ritan, three public parks, have been selected as the locations for the "legal" protests.
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Original:  "They are all close to the city proper and the Olympic venues," stated Liu Shaowu who is the Director of Security for Beijing’s Olympics organizing committee.
Revised:  "They are all close to the city proper and the Olympic venues," stated Liu Shaowu who is the Director of Security for the Beijing Olympics organizing committee.
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Original:  Demonstraters must first recieve licenses to picket and rally before protesting.
Revised:  Demonstrators must first receive licenses to picket and rally before protesting.
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Original:  The protesting zones have been considered to be nothing more than  international show by certain human rights activist.
Revised:  The protest zones have been considered to be nothing more than international show by certain human rights activist.
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Original:  The protesting zones have been considered to be nothing more than  international show by certain human rights activist.
Revised:  The protesting zones have been considered to be nothing more than an international show by certain human rights activist.
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Original: The protest zones have been considered to be nothing more than an international show by certain human rights activist . "This is only a show for foreigners," said lawyer and legal rights activist Jiang Tianyong.
Revised: The protest zones have been considered to be nothing more than an international show by certain human rights activists . "This is only a show for foreigners," said lawyer and legal rights activist Jiang Tianyong.
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Original: Beijing has set up three designated zones throughout the city , for protesting the 2008 Summer Olympics.
Revised: Beijing has set up three designated zones throughout the city for protesting the 2008 Summer Olympics.
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Original:  Chinese law states the citzens must apply five days prior to demonstrating, stating slogans to be used, number of participants, and overall topic of protest.
Revised:  Chinese law states the citizens must apply five days prior to demonstrating, stating slogans to be used, number of participants, and overall topic of protest.
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Original:  Perry Wharrie and Martin Wanden were given thirty years imprisonment, while Joe Daly was given 25.
Revised:  Perry Wharrie and Martin Wanden were given thirty years imprisonment, while Joe Daly was given twenty-five.
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Original:  The trio were involved in a cocaine smuggling operation when took place near Cork, a region of the Republic of Ireland.
Revised:  The trio were involved in a cocaine smuggling operation which took place near Cork, a region of the Republic of Ireland.
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Original:  According to evidence heard by the court that convicted the group, Wharrie , who lived in Essex, England , received life imprisonment in 1985 after murdering a police officer.
Revised:  According to evidence heard by the court , who lived in Essex, England , received life imprisonment in 1985 after murdering a police officer.
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Original:  According to evidence heard by the court that convicted the group, Wharrie , who lived in Essex, England , received life imprisonment in 1985 after murdering a police officer.
Revised:  According to evidence heard by the court that convicted the group, Wharrie , who lived in Essex, England resident, was given a life sentence in 1985 after murdering a police officer.
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Original:  According to evidence heard by the court that convicted the group, Wharrie , who lived in Essex, England , received life imprisonment in 1985 after murdering a police officer.
Revised:  According to evidence heard by the court that convicted the group, Wharrie , who lived in Essex, England , received life imprisonment in 1985 for murdering a police officer.
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Original:  Gerard Hagan, from Liverpool, England, another person who was involved in the group, pleaded guilty at the start of the trial.
Revised:  Gerard Hagan, from Liverpool, England, a person who was involved in the group, pleaded guilty at the start of the trial.
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Original:  Gerard Hagan, from Liverpool, England, another person who was involved in the group, pleaded guilty at the start of the trial.
Revised:  Gerard Hagan, from Liverpool, England, another person who was involved with the group, pleaded guilty at the start of the trial.
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Original: JPG| w: Cooling towers at Tricastin Nuclear Power Center ]]  Confidence had been shaken in the safety of France's nuclear industry because of these incidents.
Revised: JPG| Cooling towers at Tricastin Nuclear Power Center ]] Confidence had been shaken in the safety of France's nuclear industry because of these incidents.
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Original:  This industry is Pledged to expand by President Sarkozy . Environment Minister Jean-Louis Borloo ordered tests at all of France's nuclear power plants to ensure such leaks had not occurred elsewhere
Revised:  This industry is Pledged to expand by President Sarkozy 
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Original: JPG|Cooling towers at Tricastin Nuclear Power Center ]] In the latest incident, nearly a hundred workers were exposed to radiation.
Revised: JPG|Cooling towers at Tricastin Nuclear Power Center ]] In the latest incident, a hundred workers were exposed to radiation.
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Original:  Nuclear authorities "didn't understand our move, doubtless not wanting to admit that the nuclear industry's image is perhaps not perfect," he added     
Revised:  Nuclear authorities "didn't understand our move, doubtless not wanting to admit that the nuclear industry's image is perhaps not perfect," he added . 
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Original: On July 7 and again on July 23, there were accidental leaks at the Tricastin Nuclear Power Center in France, which is a collection of sites in four different communes: Saint-Paul-Trois-Châteaux and Pierrelatte in Drôme ;
Revised: On July 7 and again on July 23, there were accidental leaks at the Tricastin Nuclear Power Center in France, which is a collection of sites in four different communes: Saint-Paul-Trois-Châteaux and Pierrelatte in Drôme , and
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Original: On July 7 and again on July 23, there were accidental leaks at the Tricastin Nuclear Power Center in France, which is a collection of sites in four different communes: Saint-Paul-Trois-Châteaux and Pierrelatte in Drôme, and Bollène and Lapalud in Vaucluse.
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Original:  A union representative from Confédération générale du travail (CGT) alleged that EDF was reducing maintenance and increasingly using sub-contractors, putting workers at risk in exchange for profitability.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Local wine growers Coteaux du Tricastin AOC have already become concerned about the negative association with "Tricastin" and have begun considering changing the name of their Appellation d'origine contrôlée (AOC).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The leaks have occurred just as President Nicolas Sarkozy has been promoting the European Pressurized Reactor (EPR) as a solution to rising energy costs and global warming.
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Original:  France has the second largest nuclear power network in the world and generates over 80\% of its electricity through nuclear power
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Original: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia,  that a major bus crash in Victoria has killed at least 20 people and injured many more.
Revised: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia, that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people and injured many more.
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Original: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are  critical and one is  trapped in the wreckage.
Revised:  ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are critical and one is trapped in the wreckage.
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Original: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are  critical and one is  trapped in the wreckage.
Revised: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are critical and one is trapped in the wreckage.
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Original: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are  critical and one is  trapped in the wreckage.
Revised: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia are reporting that bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are critical and one is trapped in the wreckage.
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Original: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are  critical and one is  trapped in the wreckage.
Revised: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, two of which are critical and one is trapped in the wreckage.
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Original: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are  critical and one is  trapped in the wreckage.
Revised: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are listed as critical and one is trapped in the wreckage.
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Original: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are  critical and one is  trapped in the wreckage.
Revised: It has been reported via ABC National Radio News in Australia , and Yahoo News Australia that a major bus crash in Victoria has injured at least 20 people, at least 2 of which are critical and one is reported to be trapped in the wreckage.
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Original:  The La Trobe Valley Busliner bus was travelling east when it collided with the back of a heavy haulage truck.
Revised:  The La Trobe Valley Busliner bus was traveling East when it collided with the back of a heavy haulage truck.
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Original:  The east bound lanes of the highway have been blocked by police and traffic is being diverted
Revised:  The Eastbound lanes of the highway have been blocked by police and traffic is being diverted
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Original: The accident occurred between a bus and a semi-trailer on the Princes Highway in the Traralgon area about 10: 50 AEST.
Revised: The accident occurred between a bus and a semi-trailer on the Princes Highway in the Traralgon area about 10: 50am AEST.
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Original:  The La Trobe Valley Busliner bus was traveling East when it collided with the back of a heavy haulage truck   .
Revised:  The La Trobe Valley Busliner bus was traveling East when it collided with the back of a heavy haulage truck . .
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Original: A bus crash in Victoria, Australia has injured at least 20 people, two of whom are listed as critical and one is reported to be  trapped in the wreckage.
Revised: A bus crash in Victoria, Australia has injured at least 20 people, two of whom are listed as critical . One victim is reported to be trapped in the wreckage.
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Original: A bus crash in Victoria, Australia has injured at least 20 people, two of whom are listed as critical and one is reported to be  trapped in the wreckage.
Revised: A bus crash in Victoria, Australia has injured at least 20 people, two of whom are listed as critical and one is reported to be still trapped in the wreckage.
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Original:  The accident occurred between a bus and a semi-trailer on the Princes Highway in the Traralgon area about 10:50am AEST.
Revised:  The accident occurred between a bus and a semi-trailer on the Princes Highway in the Traralgon area around 10:50am AEST.
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Original:  The La Trobe Valley Busliner bus was traveling East when it collided with the back of a heavy haulage truck.
Revised:  The La Trobe Valley Busliner bus was traveling east when it collided with the back of a heavy haulage truck.
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Original:  Those critically injured are being airlifted to  hospital in Melbourne.
Revised:  Those critically injured are being airlifted to a hospital in Melbourne.
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Original:  The Eastbound lanes of the highway have been blocked by police and traffic is being diverted
Revised:  The eastbound lanes of the highway have been blocked by police and traffic is being diverted
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Original: On the early morning hours of Thursday, the USGS recorded another large earthquake with a magnitude of 6.4 struck the Kuril Islands, 240 km (150 miles) miles) South, Southwest of Petropavlovsk-Kamchatsky, Russia.
Revised: On the early morning hours of Thursday, the USGS recorded another large earthquake with a magnitude of 6.4 which struck in the Kuril Islands, 240 km (150 miles) miles) South, Southwest of Petropavlovsk-Kamchatsky, Russia.
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Original:  SO far there are no reports of damage or injuries, and no tsunami warning was issued in either of the quakes
Revised:  So far there are no reports of damage or injuries, and no tsunami warning was issued in either of the quakes
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Original: In just over 24 hours, two large earthquakes have shook areas in Russia and Japan.
Revised: In just over 24 hours, two large earthquakes have shaken areas in Russia and Japan.
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Original:  On Wednesday afternoon on July 23  , the United States Geological Survey (USGS) recorded a magnitude 6.8 quake which shook an area 30 kilometers (20 miles) East, Northeast of Morioka, Iwate in Japan.
Revised:  On the afternoon of Wednesday, 23 , the United States Geological Survey (USGS) recorded a magnitude 6.8 quake which shook an area 30 kilometers (20 miles) East, Northeast of Morioka, Iwate in Japan.
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Original:  Reports say the shaking could be felt  300 miles  away in Tokyo.
Revised:  Reports say the shaking could be felt 300 miles ) away in Tokyo.
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Original:  On the early morning hours of Thursday, the USGS recorded another large earthquake with a magnitude of 6.4 which struck in the Kuril Islands, 240 km (150 miles) miles) South, Southwest of Petropavlovsk-Kamchatsky, Russia.
Revised:  On the early morning hours of Thursday, the USGS recorded another large earthquake with a magnitude of 6.4 which struck in the Kuril Islands, 240 km (150 miles) South-Southwest of Petropavlovsk-Kamchatsky, Russia.
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Original: On the afternoonof Wednesday, 23 July, the United States Geological Survey (USGS) recorded a magnitude 6.8 quake which shook an area 30 kilometers (20 miles) East, Northeast of Morioka, Iwate in Japan.
Revised: On the afternoonof Wednesday, 23 July, the United States Geological Survey (USGS) recorded a magnitude 6.8 quake which shook an area 30 kilometers (20 miles) east-northeast of Morioka, Iwate in Japan.
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