wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  "There are policies in place that, on the one hand, safeguard sensitive and classified information, and on the other hand protects the First Amendment rights of servicemembers," says Army spokesman Lieutenant Colonel Chris Conway , "In plain English, if you're on the job working for the Department of Defense, you shouldn't be freelancing.
Revised:  "There are policies in place that, on the one hand, safeguard sensitive and classified information, and on the other hand protects the First Amendment rights of servicemembers," said Army spokesman Lieutenant Colonel Chris Conway , "In plain English, if you're on the job working for the Department of Defense, you shouldn't be freelancing.
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Original:  "There are policies in place that, on the one hand, safeguard sensitive and classified information, and on the other hand protects the First Amendment rights of servicemembers," says Army spokesman Lieutenant Colonel Chris Conway , "In plain English, if you're on the job working for the Department of Defense, you shouldn't be freelancing.
Revised:  "There are policies in place that, on the one hand, safeguard sensitive and classified information, and on the other hand protects the First Amendment rights of servicemembers," says Army spokesman Lieutenant Colonel Chris Conway . "In plain English, if you're on the job working for the Department of Defense, you shouldn't be freelancing.
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Original: An amateur pornographic website, NowThatsFuckedup.com, is giving free access to it's content to American soldiers currently who post graphic pictures of corpses from Iraq and Afghanistan.
Revised: An amateur pornographic website, NowThatsFuckedup.com, is giving free access to its content to American soldiers currently who post graphic pictures of corpses from Iraq and Afghanistan.
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Original:  NowThatsFuckedup.com, is giving free access to its content to American soldiers currently who post graphic pictures of corpses from Iraq and Afghanistan  . Chris Wilson of Florida, the website administrator, says he started offering free memberships to soldiers in exchange for photographs from overseas after finding that many soldiers wanted to join the site, but could not due to issues with recognizing foreign addresses associated with credit cards held by overseas enlisted men.
Revised:  NowThatsFuckedup.com, is giving free access to its content to American soldiers currently who post pictures of corpses from Iraq and Afghanistan . Chris Wilson of Florida, the website administrator, says he started offering free memberships to soldiers in exchange for photographs from overseas after finding that many soldiers wanted to join the site, but could not due to issues with recognizing foreign addresses associated with credit cards held by overseas enlisted men.
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Original:  "At daybreak I found substantial breaks and they've grown larger.  
Revised:  "At daybreak I found substantial breaks and they've grown larger. " 
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Original:  Water is spilling over the levee in a section 100 feet wide  
Revised:  Water is spilling over the levee in a section 100 feet wide . 
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Original: Rain and the storm surge from Hurricane Rita has overwhelmed one of the fragile levee in New Orleans.
Revised: Rain and the storm surge from Hurricane Rita have overwhelmed one of the fragile levee in New Orleans.
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Original: Rain and the storm surge from Hurricane Rita has overwhelmed one of the fragile levee in New Orleans.
Revised: Rain and the storm surge from Hurricane Rita has overwhelmed one of the fragile levees in New Orleans.
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Original:  The Ninth Ward, which saw flooding as high as 20 feet during Hurricane Katrina, is currently in waist high water as the nearby levee was overtopped.
Revised:  The Ninth Ward, which saw flooding as high as 20 feet during Hurricane Katrina, is currently in waist-high water as the nearby levee was overtopped.
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Original:  The Gentilly neighborhood has water accumulations of to 6 to 8 inches deep as the patched London Avenue Canal has sprung leaks near its base
Revised:  The Gentilly neighborhood has water accumulations of 6 to 8 inches deep as the patched London Avenue Canal has sprung leaks near its base
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Original:  Many expect Palm to release both PalmOS somewhat implied by the model number Treo 700w , a PalmOs version of the phone would most likely be named Treo 700p
Revised:  Many expect Palm to release both PalmOS somewhat implied by the model number Treo 700w . A PalmOS version of the phone would most likely be named Treo 700p
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Original: Technology weblog engadget has published exclusive photos of the yet to be released Palm Treo 700w.
Revised: Technology weblog Engadget has published exclusive photos of the yet to be released Palm Treo 700w.
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Original: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest of China 's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop.
Revised: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest of China Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop.
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Original:  Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05  local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
Revised:  Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
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Original: Xinhua reports  one of the identified bodies was that of a child.
Revised: Xinhua reports that one of the identified bodies was that of a child.
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Original: Xinhua reports  one of the identified bodies was that of a child.
Revised: Xinhua reports one of the bodies was that of a child.
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Original: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop . Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
Revised: Seven people were killed and thirty-seven were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop . Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
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Original: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop . Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
Revised: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet Cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop . Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
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Original: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop . Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
Revised: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a storage facility . Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
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Original: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop . Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
Revised: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop . Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby storage facility and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
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Original: Seven people were killed and thirty-seven were injured Saturday night at an Internet Cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a storage facility .
Revised: Seven people were killed and 37 were injured Saturday night at an Internet Cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a storage facility .
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Original: Seven people were killed and thirty-seven were injured Saturday night at an Internet Cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a storage facility .
Revised: Seven people were killed and thirty-seven were injured Saturday night at an Internet cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a storage facility .
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Original: Seven people were killed and thirty-seven were injured Saturday night at an Internet Cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a storage facility .
Revised: Seven people were killed and thirty-seven were injured Saturday night at an Internet Cafe in the southwest region of China's Guizhou province, after the explosion of chemicals being stored illegally at a chemical shop .
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Original:  Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby storage facility and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
Revised:  Chinese state media reported that sodium nitrate, aluminum chloride, and other chemicals were being kept in a nearby chemical shop and exploded at about 11:05 pm local time (1505 UTC), causing the Internet cafe to catch on fire.
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Original:  Children under the age of eighteen are not allowed in Internet cafes under Chinese law.
Revised:  Children under the age of eighteen are not allowed in Internet cafes under so coool.
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Original:  Residential buildings in the area also suffered damaged 
Revised:  Residential buildings in the area also suffered damaged . :
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Original:  Children under the age of eighteen are not allowed in Internet cafes under so coool.
Revised:  Children under the age of eighteen are not allowed in Internet cafes under Chinese law.
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Original:  Residential buildings in the area also suffered damaged . :
Revised:  Residential buildings in the area also suffered damaged 
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Original:  Filers with less than $ [   100 in income, after subtracting certain expenses, will be able to liquidate under Chapter 7.
Revised:  Filers with less than $ [the 100 in income, after subtracting certain expenses, will be able to liquidate under Chapter 7.
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Original:  Democratic legislators therefore claim that requiring bankrupted Hurricane Katrina victims to repay some creditors while citizens in other states with similar incomes would pay nothing is unfair.
Revised:  Democrats also feel that it is unfair to require repayment by bankrupted Hurricane Katrina victims to repay some creditors while citizens in other states with similar incomes would pay nothing is unfair.
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Original:  Democratic legislators therefore claim that requiring bankrupted Hurricane Katrina victims to repay some creditors while citizens in other states with similar incomes would pay nothing is unfair.
Revised:  Democratic legislators therefore claim that requiring bankrupted Hurricane Katrina victims while citizens in other states with similar incomes would pay nothing is unfair.
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Original:  Democratic legislators therefore claim that requiring bankrupted Hurricane Katrina victims to repay some creditors while citizens in other states with similar incomes would pay nothing is unfair.
Revised:  Democratic legislators therefore claim that requiring bankrupted Hurricane Katrina victims to repay some creditors while citizens in other states with similar incomes would pay nothing .
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Original:  He noted that "If someone in Katrina is down and out, and has no possibility of being able to repay 40 percent or more of their debts, then the new bankruptcy law doesn't apply ," Sensenbrenner said ." The Bankruptcy Abuse Prevention and Consumer Protection Act of 2005 has been criticized by some consumer rights' organizations.
Revised:  He noted that "If someone in Katrina is down and out, and has no possibility of being able to repay 40 percent or more of their debts, then the new bankruptcy law doesn't apply ." The Bankruptcy Abuse Prevention and Consumer Protection Act of 2005 has been criticized by some consumer rights' organizations.
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Original:  However, the new law applies not to all hurricane victims applying for bankruptcy, but only to those with high enough income to fail the means test.
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Original:  Nathalie Martin, of the American Bankruptcy Institute said that, "Many people will still qualify to file for Chapter 7," This includes many hurricane victims, who are likely to have no income and few assets.
Revised:  Nathalie Martin, of the American Bankruptcy Institute (ABI), said that "Many people will still qualify to file for Chapter 7," This includes many hurricane victims, who are likely to have no income and few assets.
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Original:  This means they would repay no debts 
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Original:  Nathalie Martin, of the American Bankruptcy Institute (ABI), said that "Many people will still qualify to file for Chapter 7." The Bankruptcy Abuse Prevention and Consumer Protection Act of 2005 has been criticized by the Democratic party and consumer rights' organizations.
Revised:  The Bankruptcy Abuse Prevention and Consumer Protection Act of 2005 has been criticized by the Democratic party and consumer rights' organizations.
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Original:  Liberals have also criticized the act has as being "bought and paid for" by the Credit Card Industry, who spent millions lobbying in support of the bill .
Revised:  Such opponents view the bulk of the act either as "bought and paid for" by the Credit Card Industry, who spent millions lobbying in support of the bill .
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Original:  Other critics view the bill as an unfortuinate compromise between the bank lobiest and bankrupsy lawyers lobiest , such as ABI
Revised:  Other critics view the bill as an unfortuinate compromise between the lobiest for banks and bankrupsy lawyers lobiest , such as ABI
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Original:  Other critics view the bill as an unfortuinate compromise between the bank lobiest and bankrupsy lawyers lobiest , such as ABI
Revised:  Other critics view the bill as an unfortuinate compromise between the bank lobiest and bankrupsy lawyers , such as ABI
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Original: The bills opponents also argued that it makes  government "a bill collector for private companies", will lead to criminal prosecutions over matters best left in civil corts , and theoretically even to life imprisonment under federal three-strikes laws.
Revised: Opponents of the bill also argued that it makes government "a bill collector for private companies", will lead to criminal prosecutions over matters best left in civil corts , and theoretically even to life imprisonment under federal three-strikes laws.
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Original: The bills opponents also argued that it makes  government "a bill collector for private companies", will lead to criminal prosecutions over matters best left in civil corts , and theoretically even to life imprisonment under federal three-strikes laws.
Revised: The bills opponents also argued that it makes the government "a bill collector for private companies", will lead to criminal prosecutions over matters best left in civil corts , and theoretically even to life imprisonment under federal three-strikes laws.
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Original: The bills opponents also argued that it makes  government "a bill collector for private companies", will lead to criminal prosecutions over matters best left in civil corts , and theoretically even to life imprisonment under federal three-strikes laws.
Revised: The bills opponents also argued that it makes government "a bill collector for private companies", and could lead to criminal prosecutions over matters best left in civil corts , and theoretically even to life imprisonment under federal three-strikes laws.
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Original: The bills opponents also argued that it makes  government "a bill collector for private companies", will lead to criminal prosecutions over matters best left in civil corts , and theoretically even to life imprisonment under federal three-strikes laws.
Revised: The bills opponents also argued that it makes government "a bill collector for private companies", will lead to criminal prosecutions over matters best left in civil courts , and theoretically even to life imprisonment under federal three-strikes laws.
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Original:  Such opponents view the bulk of the act either as "bought and paid for" by the Credit Card Industry, who spent millions lobbying in support of the bill, or else as an unfortuinate compromise between the lobiest for banks and bankruptcy lawyers, such as the American Bankruptcy Institute (ABI).
Revised:  Such opponents view the bulk of the act either as "bought and paid for" by the Credit Card Industry, who spent millions lobbying in support of the bill, or else as an unfortunate compromise between the lobiest for banks and bankruptcy lawyers, such as the American Bankruptcy Institute (ABI).
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Original:  Such opponents view the bulk of the act either as "bought and paid for" by the Credit Card Industry, who spent millions lobbying in support of the bill, or else as an unfortuinate compromise between the lobiest for banks and bankruptcy lawyers, such as the American Bankruptcy Institute (ABI).
Revised:  Such opponents view the bulk of the act either as "bought and paid for" by the Credit Card Industry, who spent millions lobbying in support of the bill, or else as an unfortuinate compromise between the lobbyists for banks and bankruptcy lawyers, such as the American Bankruptcy Institute (ABI).
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Original: Mr. P V Narasimha Rao, former Prime Minister of India, passed away this morning after suffering cardiac arrest in a private hospital in New Delhi.
Revised: Mr. P V Narasimha Rao, former prime minister of India, passed away this morning after suffering cardiac arrest in a private hospital in New Delhi.
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Original:  The cables between the then prime minister of Australia, Kevin Rudd, and the US Secretary of State, Hillary Clinton, revealed that China may be need to be forced for integration into the international community.
Revised:  The cables between the then prime minister of Australia, Kevin Rudd, and the US Secretary of State, Hillary Clinton, revealed that China may be forced for integration into the international community.
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Original:  At this stage, Julia Gillard has provided no further comment on the matter, other than that to ensure that the relationship between China and Australia would allow opinions to be expressed without any threat to either side.
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Original:  Earlier this week, Assange was arrested on suspicion of rape in London under a Swedish arrest warrant placed on him on from a court in Stockholm on November 18
Revised:  Earlier this week, Assange was arrested on suspicion of rape in London under a Swedish arrest warrant 
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Original:  The cables between the then prime minister of Australia, Kevin Rudd, and the US Secretary of State, Hillary Clinton, revealed that China may be  forced for integration into the international community.
Revised:  The cables between the then prime minister of Australia, Kevin Rudd, and the US Secretary of State, Hillary Clinton, revealed that China may be need to be forced for integration into the international community.
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Original:   At the heart of the leaks is Australian founder, Julian Assange.
Revised:  At this stage, Julia Gillard has provided no further comment on the matter, other than that to ensure that the relationship between China and Australia would allow opinions to be expressed without any threat to either side. At the heart of the leaks is Australian founder, Julian Assange.
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Original:  The cables between the then prime minister of Australia, Kevin Rudd, and the US Secretary of State, Hillary Clinton, revealed that China may be need to be forced for integration into the international community.
Revised:  The cables between the then prime minister of Australia, Kevin Rudd, and the US Secretary of State, Hillary Clinton, revealed that China may need to be forced for integration into the international community.
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Original:  The cables between the then prime minister of Australia, Kevin Rudd, and the US Secretary of State, Hillary Clinton, revealed that China may be need to be forced for integration into the international community.
Revised:  The cables between the then prime minister of Australia, Kevin Rudd, and the US Secretary of State, Hillary Clinton, revealed that China may be need to be forced to integrate into the international community.
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Original:  Earlier this week, Assange was arrested on suspicion of rape in London under a Swedish arrest warrant placed on him on from a court in Stockholm on November 18
Revised:  Earlier this week, Assange was arrested on suspicion of rape in London under a Swedish arrest warrant placed on him from a court in Stockholm on November 18
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Original:  The show was halted after the accident for the first time in the shows history.
Revised:  The show was halted after the accident for the first time in the show's history.
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Original:  Koch was attempting to jump over five oncoming cars using spring-powered stilts known as "powerbocks".
Revised:  Koch was attempting to jump over five moving cars using spring-powered stilts known as "powerbocks".
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