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Original:  It's a time of peace and sharing"  Opposition leader Kim Beazley used Mr Howard's comments to attack the government's industrial relations policy saying "I would say this to John Howard and to the Australian people about it, the biggest threat to Christmas in this country is John Howard's extreme industrial relations law".
Revised:  It's a time of peace and sharing" . Opposition leader Kim Beazley used Mr Howard's comments to attack the government's industrial relations policy saying "I would say this to John Howard and to the Australian people about it, the biggest threat to Christmas in this country is John Howard's extreme industrial relations law".
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Original:  He added that people who wished to take time off work to celebrate christmas have no rights to do so under the government's industrial relations reforms
Revised:  He added that people who wished to take time off work to celebrate Christmas have no rights to do so under the government's industrial relations reforms
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Original: Survivors of the London Bombings have urged the British public to write to their MPs, and set up an online petition() calling for an independent Public Inquiry into the attacks.
Revised: Survivors of the London Bombings have urged the British public to write to their MPs, and set up an online URL calling for an independent Public Inquiry into the attacks.
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Original:  Some survivors, such as Rachel North (a pseudonym), who has been active in organising support groups for her fellow victims, have been angered by the government's refusal to allow an Inquiry.
Revised:  Some survivors, such as Rachel North (a pseudonym), who has been active in organising a support group for her fellow victims, have been angered by the government's refusal to allow an Inquiry.
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Original: Survivors of the London Bombings have urged the British public to write to their MPs, and set up an online petition calling for an independent Public Inquiry into the attacks.
Revised: Survivors of the London Bombings have urged the British public to write to their MPs, and set up an online petitioncalling for an independent Public Inquiry into the attacks.
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Original:  The British government has given no response to the survivors' comments
Revised:  The British government has given no response as yet
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Original: Earlier this week the British government rejected calls for a Public Inquiry into the attacks , arguing that such an investigation would be too expensive, take too long, and be a distraction from their efforts to combat terrorism.
Revised: Earlier this week the British government rejected calls for a Public Inquiry , arguing that such an investigation would be too expensive, take too long, and be a distraction from their efforts to combat terrorism.
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Original:  But survivors of the attack argue that a fully comprehensive inquiry could teach valuable lessons which may help reduce the likelihood of future attacks, and improve the response capabilities of the emergency services.
Revised:  But survivors of the attack argue that a fully comprehensive investigation could teach valuable lessons which may help reduce the likelihood of future attacks, and improve the response capabilities of the emergency services.
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Original:  I don't want others to have to go through what myself and hundreds of other commuters did on that Summer's day.'  Relatives of the dead have also been very critical , Quoted on the BBC's website, Saba Mozakka, the daughter of Behnaz Mozakka,who died in the Piccadilly Line explosion, said:
Revised:  I don't want others to have to go through what myself and hundreds of other commuters did on that Summer's day.' " Relatives of the dead have also been very critical , Quoted on the BBC's website, Saba Mozakka, the daughter of Behnaz Mozakka,who died in the Piccadilly Line explosion, said:
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Original:  I don't want others to have to go through what myself and hundreds of other commuters did on that Summer's day.'  Relatives of the dead have also been very critical , Quoted on the BBC's website, Saba Mozakka, the daughter of Behnaz Mozakka,who died in the Piccadilly Line explosion, said:
Revised:  I don't want others to have to go through what myself and hundreds of other commuters did on that Summer's day.' Relatives of the dead have also been very critical . Quoted on the BBC's website, Saba Mozakka, the daughter of Behnaz Mozakka,who died in the Piccadilly Line explosion, said:
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Original: thumb According to a poll taken by Demoscopia and published in the Costa Rican newspaper Al Día , 53\% of respondants say they disapprove of the presidency of Abel Pacheco .
Revised: thumb According to a poll taken by Demoscopia and published in the Costa Rican newspaper , 53\% of respondants say they disapprove of the presidency of Abel Pacheco .
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Original: thumb According to a poll taken by Demoscopia and published in the Costa Rican newspaper Al Día , 53\% of respondants say they disapprove of the presidency of Abel Pacheco .
Revised: thumb According to a poll taken by Demoscopia and published in the Costa Rican newspaper Al Día , 53\% of respondants say they disapprove of the presidency of .
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Original:  Costa Rica is the only Central American country yet to ratify the Central American Free Trade Agreement (or CAFTA).
Revised:  Costa Rica is the only Central American country yet to ratify the (or CAFTA).
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Original:  Her brother said to n-tv that she has been brought to the German embassy in Baghdad and is well.
Revised:  Her brother told n-tv that she has been brought to the German embassy in Baghdad and is well.
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Original:  Her brother said to n-tv that she has been brought to the German embassy in Baghdad and is well.
Revised:  Her brother said to n-tv that she had been brought to the German embassy in Baghdad and is well.
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Original:  Foreign minister Frank-Walter Steinmeier confirmed the reports and said that her Iraqi driver, who was abducted along with her, is still in the hands of the kidnappers but who promised to release him aswell .
Revised:  Foreign minister Frank-Walter Steinmeier confirmed the reports and said that her Iraqi driver, who was abducted along with her, is still in the hands of the kidnappers but they have promised to release him aswell .
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Original:  Foreign minister Frank-Walter Steinmeier confirmed the reports and said that her Iraqi driver, who was abducted along with her, is still in the hands of the kidnappers but who promised to release him aswell .
Revised:  Foreign minister Frank-Walter Steinmeier confirmed the reports and said that her Iraqi driver, who was abducted along with her, is still in the hands of the kidnappers but who promised to release him as well .
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Original:  How she was freed, whether ransom was paid  or even which group abducted her is still unknown at the time.
Revised:  How she was freed, whether ransom was paid , or even which group abducted her is still unknown at the time.
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Original:  How she was freed, whether ransom was paid  or even which group abducted her is still unknown at the time.
Revised:  How she was freed, whether ransom was paid or even which group abducted her is still unknown at this time.
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Original:  Steinmeier declined to answer questions regarding this .
Revised:  Steinmeier declined to answer any questions on the topic .
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Original:  She is a converted Muslim and married to  Jordanian.
Revised:  She is a converted Muslim and married to a Jordanian.
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Original: In 2005, Bud Luckey was nominated for Academy Awards for , a short film that he wrote, directed, narrated as well as sung .
Revised: In 2005, Bud Luckey was nominated for an for , a short film that he wrote, directed, narrated as well as sung .
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Original: In 2005, Bud Luckey was nominated for Academy Awards for , a short film that he wrote, directed, narrated as well as sung .
Revised: In 2005, Bud Luckey was nominated for Academy Awards for , a short film he wrote, directed, narrated as well as sung .
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Original: In 2005, Bud Luckey was nominated for Academy Awards for , a short film that he wrote, directed, narrated as well as sung .
Revised: In 2005, Bud Luckey was nominated for Academy Awards for , a short film that he wrote, directed, narrated , and sang .
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Original:  He received the Annie Award for that five-minute short.
Revised:  He received the for that five-minute short.
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Original:   Toy Story 3 and 's director tweeted, "So sad to hear that Bud Luckey passed away today.
Revised:  , director of Toy Story 3 and 's director tweeted, "So sad to hear that Bud Luckey passed away today.
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Original:   Toy Story 3 and 's director tweeted, "So sad to hear that Bud Luckey passed away today.
Revised:  Toy Story 3 and , tweeted, "So sad to hear that Bud Luckey passed away today.
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Original: Up 19-17 in the fourth quarter, San Diego pushed the   lead to 26-17 with two minutes left.
Revised: The San Diego Chargers defeated the Indianapolis Colts 26-17 at the RCA Dome in Indianapolis. It is the first loss of the season for the Colts, who are the fourth team in NFL history to win their first 13 games. lead to 26-17 with two minutes left.
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Original:  Colt's tried to bring it back but San Diego intercepted a pass at the end zone.
Revised:  The Colts tried to bring it back but San Diego intercepted a pass at the end zone.
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Original:  That play was followed by two touchdowns and a field goal within 6 minutes for Indianapolis , giving them a 17-16 lead.
Revised:  Indianapolis responded with two touchdowns and a field goal within 6 minutes for Indianapolis , giving them a 17-16 lead.
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Original:  That play was followed by two touchdowns and a field goal within 6 minutes for Indianapolis , giving them a 17-16 lead.
Revised:  That play was followed by two touchdowns and a field goal in 6 minutes for Indianapolis , giving them a 17-16 lead.
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Original:  That play was followed by two touchdowns and a field goal within 6 minutes for Indianapolis , giving them a 17-16 lead.
Revised:  That play was followed by two touchdowns and a field goal within 6 minutes , giving them a 17-16 lead.
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Original:  After a 49-yard Kaeding field goal put San Diego up 19-17 in the fourth quarter , rookie Chagers defensive tackle Luis Castillo sacked Colts quarterback Peyton Manning putting Indianapolis out of field goal range.
Revised:  After a 49-yard field goal to put San Diego up 19-17 in the fourth quarter , rookie Chagers defensive tackle Luis Castillo sacked Colts quarterback Peyton Manning putting Indianapolis out of field goal range.
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Original:  Chargers running back Michael Turner then scored a touchdown on an 83-yard running play, pushing the lead to 26-17 with two minutes left.
Revised:  Chargers running back Michael Turner then scored a touchdown on an 83-yard running play, pushing San Diego's lead to 26-17 with two minutes left.
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Original:  Nate Kaeding kicked a 48-yard field goal in the third period to increase the Chargers' lead to 16 points .
Revised:  Nate Kaeding kicked a 48-yard field goal in the third period to increase the Chargers' lead to 16 points , but
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Original:  Indianapolis responded with two touchdowns and a field goal in 6 minutes, giving them a 17-16 lead.
Revised:  Indianapolis responded with two touchdowns and a field goal in 6 minutes, giving the Colts a 17-16 lead.
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Original: Hospital officials at Hadassah Ein Karem Hospital in Jerusalem announced that Israeli Prime Minister Ariel Sharon sufferd a mild stroke Sunday evening.
Revised: Hospital officials at Hadassah Ein Karem Hospital in Jerusalem announced that Israeli Prime Minister Ariel Sharon suffered a mild stroke Sunday evening.
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Original:  Sharon was rushed to hospital where " no invasive procedures " were necessary.
Revised:  Sharon was rushed to hospital where " no invasive procedures were necessary.
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Original:  Sharon will remain in hospital several days as he recovers, but is continuing to maintain full control of events in Israel.
Revised:  Sharon stay in hospital is likely to be brief, some reports suggest he may be relased in the morning. Despite is hospitalisation, he is continuing to maintain full control of events in Israel.
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Original:  Sharon has not previously suffered major health difficulties, although  his stressful life and postion may have contributed to the current scareaccording to BBC News reports
Revised:  Sharon has not previously suffered major health difficulties, although his stressful life and postion may have contributed to the incident and surrounding scare
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Original: Sharon stay in hospital is likely to be brief, some reports suggest he may be relased in the morning.
Revised: Sharon 's stay in the hospital is likely to be brief, some reports suggest he may be relased in the morning.
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Original:  Ariel Sharon visiting the White House in 2004 "Our tests have shown that the prime minister had a mild CVA," (stroke) said Dr.
Revised:  "Our tests have shown that the prime minister had a mild CVA," (stroke) said Dr.
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Original:  Sharon was rushed to hospital where Dr Weiss stated that no invasive procedures were necessary.
Revised:  He was rushed to hospital where Dr Weiss stated that no invasive procedures were necessary.
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Original:  Sharon did temporarily suffer some minor physical symptoms including slurring of speech and loss of some motor control.
Revised:  Sharon briefly suffered some minor physical symptoms including slurring of speech and loss of some motor control.
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Original:  None of the four was killed by a sheriff's deputy who exchanged shots with Wong.
Revised:  Officials said there was no indication any of the four was killed by a sheriff's deputy who exchanged shots with Wong.
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Original:  A little before 6 PM  a video feed from a remote-controlled robot showed the four people in the room were probably dead.
Revised:  A little before 6 PM , a video feed from a remote-controlled robot showed the four people in the room were probably dead.
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Original:  She was in her last trimester of pregnancy.
Revised:  She was entering her last trimester of pregnancy.
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Original:  He had been in treatment at the center for about a year but had been expelled two weeks before the hostage taking after knives were found in his possession.
Revised:  He had been in treatment at the center for about a year but had been expelled two weeks before the hostage-taking because knives were found in his possession.
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Original:  Wong's fatal head wound was also self-inflicted.
Revised:  Wong's fatal head wound was self-inflicted.
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Original: The Board of Directors of The Pathway Home announced on Wednesday that it would close "indefinitely".
Revised: The Board of Directors of The Pathway Home announced on Wednesday that it would suspend operations "indefinitely".
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Original:  About ten minutes later, shots were heard, and the deputy and Wong exchanged fire.
Revised:  About ten minutes later, shots were heard, and a sheriff's deputy and Wong exchanged fire.
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Original:  It was a ten-year-old non-profit in-patient center treating veterans with PTSD, brain injuries, depression and addictions on the campus of the Veterans Home of California in Yountville, a small town in the wine country a little more than 50 miles north of San Francisco.
Revised:  It is a ten-year-old non-profit in-patient center treating veterans with PTSD, brain injuries, depression and addictions on the campus of the Veterans Home of California in Yountville, a small town in the wine country a little more than 50 miles north of San Francisco.
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Original:  His brother Tyrone Lampkin said Wong had been angry and said he "wanted to get back at them", but what he had mentioned was to "talk to them, yell at them, not to kill them".
Revised:  His brother Tyrone Lampkin told , Wong had been angry and said he "wanted to get back at them", but what he had mentioned was to "talk to them, yell at them, not to kill them".
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Original: Autopsy results released on Thursday by the  show that Albert Wong killed himself after shooting his three hostages at The Pathway Home veterans' psychiatric center in , last Friday.
Revised: Autopsy results released on Thursday by the , which show that Albert Wong killed himself after shooting his three hostages at The Pathway Home veterans' psychiatric center in , last Friday.
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Original:  It is a ten-year-old non-profit in-patient center treating veterans with PTSD, brain injuries, depression and addictions on the campus of the Veterans Home of California in Yountville , a small town in the wine country a little more than 50 miles north of San Francisco.
Revised:  It is a ten-year-old non-profit in-patient center treating veterans with PTSD, brain injuries, depression and addictions on the campus of the . Yountville is a small town in the wine country a little more than 50 miles north of San Francisco.
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Original:  The Veterans Home is the largest in the United States, with more than 900 residents  
Revised:  The Veterans Home is the largest in the United States, with more than 900 residents . 
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Original: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Mirror's exposé prompts call for inquiry into child abuse ring in Telford, England}} On Monday, called for a public inquiry into an alleged child sexual exploitation ring in , England, which may have been going on for 40 years and had as many as 1000 girls as victims.
Revised: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Mirror's exposé promts call for inquiry into child abuse ring in Telford, England}} On Monday, called for a public inquiry into an alleged child sexual exploitation ring in , England, which may have been going on for 40 years and had as many as 1000 girls as victims.
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Original:  IICSA which is the has plans to look into the Telford situation, according to the BBC    ] 
Revised:  IICSA is the which has plans to look into the Telford situation, according to the BBC ] 
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Original: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Mirror's exposé prompts call for inquiry into child abuse ring in Telford, England}} On Monday, called for a public inquiry into an alleged child sexual exploitation ring in town in the county of , England, which may have been going on for 40 years and had as many as 1000 girls as victims.
Revised: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Mirror's exposé prompts call for inquiry into child abuse ring in Telford, England}} On Monday, called for a public inquiry into an alleged child sexual exploitation ring in , , England, which may have been going on for 40 years and had as many as 1000 girls as victims.
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Original: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Mirror's exposé prompts call for inquiry into child abuse ring in Telford, England}} On Monday, called for a public inquiry into an alleged child sexual exploitation ring in town in the county of , England, which may have been going on for 40 years and had as many as 1000 girls as victims.
Revised: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Mirror's exposé prompts call for inquiry into child abuse ring in Telford, England}} On Monday, called for a public inquiry into an alleged child sexual exploitation ring in town in the county of , England, which may have been operating for 40 years and had as many as 1000 girls as victims.
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Original: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Mirror's exposé prompts call for inquiry into child abuse ring in Telford, England}} On Monday, called for a public inquiry into an alleged child sexual exploitation ring in town in the county of , England, which may have been going on for 40 years and had as many as 1000 girls as victims.
Revised: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Mirror's exposé prompts call for inquiry into child abuse ring in Telford, England}} On Monday, called for a public inquiry into an alleged child sexual exploitation ring in town in the county of , England, which may have been going on for 40 years and had as many as a thousand girls as victims.
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Original:  This comes in direct response to an by the the previous day.
Revised:  This came in direct response to an by the the previous day.
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Original:  Lucy Allan, MP The report alleges hundreds of girls were raped, beaten, drugged and sold for sex.
Revised:  Lucy Allan, MP The Mirror alleges that hundreds of girls were raped, beaten, drugged and sold for sex.
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Original:  Details of negligence and outright misconduct by  authorities, including city council staff, the police and social workers, are also contained in the exposé.
Revised:  Details of negligence and outright misconduct by the authorities, including city council staff, the police and social workers, are also contained in the exposé.
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Original:  Details of negligence and outright misconduct by  authorities, including city council staff, the police and social workers, are also contained in the exposé.
Revised:  Details of negligence and outright misconduct by authorities, including council staff, the police and social workers, are also contained in the exposé.
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Original:  "There must now be an independent inquiry into child sexual exploitation in Telford so that our community can have absolute confidence in the authorities," Lucy Allan said.
Revised:  "There must now be an independent inquiry into child sexual exploitation in Telford so that our community can have absolute confidence in the authorities," Allan said.
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Original:  such an inquiry is outside the current scope of the IICSA." IICSA is the which has plans to look into the Telford situation, according to the BBC.
Revised:  such an inquiry is outside the current scope of the IICSA." IICSA is the , which plans to look into the Telford situation, according to the BBC.
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Original:  Back in 2013, saw the breakup of a child sex grooming ring in Telford with seven men of South Asian extraction convicted.
Revised:  In 2013, saw the breakup of a child sex grooming ring in Telford with seven men of South Asian extraction convicted.
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Original:  Back in 2013, saw the breakup of a child sex grooming ring in Telford with seven men of South Asian extraction convicted.
Revised:  Back in 2013, saw the breakup of a child sex grooming ring in Telford with seven men of South Asian origin convicted.
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Original:  The Mirror'' also said  authorities actively tried to obstruct their investigation.
Revised:  The Mirror'' also said the authorities actively tried to obstruct their investigation.
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Original:  Allan wants an independent inquiry, similar to the one for the which came to light in 2012 and had a similar scale and duration.
Revised:  Allan wants an independent inquiry, similar that for the , which came to light in 2012 and had a similar scale and duration.
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Original:  Details of negligence and outright misconduct by the authorities, including  council staff, the police and social workers, are also contained in the exposé.
Revised:  Details of negligence and outright misconduct by the authorities, including local council staff, the police and social workers, are also contained in the exposé.
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Original:  police not investigating in spite of five reports being filed.
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Original:  The Mirror'' also said the authorities actively tried to obstruct their investigation.
Revised:  The Mirror'' also said that bthe authorities actively tried to obstruct their investigation.
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