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Original:  He cancelled his apperance after the accident and released a statement threw his Twitter page.
Revised:  He cancelled his appearance after the accident and released a statement threw his Twitter page.
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Original:  He also sent his wishes to Koch saying  "Please pray for Samuel Koch and his family as we wait and hope for his health and safety."
Revised:  He also sent his wishes to Koch saying , "Please pray for Samuel Koch and his family as we wait and hope for his health and safety."
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Original:  The Rheinische Post said  "Since Saturday evening, finally, parents have to think seriously about whether Wetten Dass…? represents an appropriate format for children.
Revised:  The Rheinische Post said , "Since Saturday evening, finally, parents have to think seriously about whether Wetten Dass…? represents an appropriate format for children.
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Original:  Bellut told a public radio station  "'Wetten, dass' will certainly continue."
Revised:  Bellut told a public radio station , "'Wetten, dass' will certainly continue."
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Original:  He did defend the show's saftey record saying  "We will boost our safety standards once again although we were always of the opinion that they could hardly be more stringent.
Revised:  He did defend the show's saftey record saying , "We will boost our safety standards once again although we were always of the opinion that they could hardly be more stringent.
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Original: A spokesperson at Dusseldorf University Hospital commented on Koch's conditition .
Revised: A spokesperson at Dusseldorf University Hospital commented on Koch's condition .
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Original:  He said Koch was "in an extremely critical stage" and also warned that he was showing "signs of paralysis".
Revised:  He said Koch was "in an extremely critical stage" and warned that he was showing "signs of paralysis".
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Original:  He lay on the floor face-down as the camera's went to shots of the shocked reactions of the audience and celebrity guests.
Revised:  He lay on the floor facedown as the cameras went to shots of the shocked reactions of the audience and celebrity guests.
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Original:  The show has been known as a family friendly show, however, a German newspaper has questioned whether the show is sutible for children after the accident.
Revised:  The show has been known as a family friendly show, however, a German newspaper has questioned whether the show is suitable for children after the accident.
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Original:  The annoucment was made by Thomas Bellut, the programme director of the television station  ZDF.
Revised:  Thomas Bellut, the programme director of the television station ZDF.
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Original:  He did defend the show's saftey record saying, "We will boost our safety standards once again although we were always of the opinion that they could hardly be more stringent.
Revised:  He did defend the show's safety record saying, "We will boost our safety standards once again although we were always of the opinion that they could hardly be more stringent.
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Original:  He lay on the floor facedown as the cameras went to shots of the shocked reactions of the audience and celebrity guests.
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Original:  He did defend the show's safety record saying, "We will boost our safety standards once again although we were always of the opinion that they could hardly be more stringent.
Revised:  He did defend the show's safety standards saying, "We will boost our safety standards once again although we were always of the opinion that they could hardly be more stringent.
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Original:  He cancelled his appearance after the accident and released a statement threw his Twitter page.
Revised:  He cancelled his appearance after the accident and released a statement through his Twitter page.
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Original:  The core of Hurricane Rita made landfall just west of the Texas-Louisiana border as a category 3 storm on Saturday morning with sustained winds near 120 mph.
Revised:  The core of Hurricane Rita made landfall just west of the Texas-Louisiana border as a category 3 storm at 3 AM Saturday with sustained winds near 120 mph.
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Original:  Tides are about 2 feet above normal along the Louisiana, Mississippi, and Alabama coasts, and tides will increase to 4-6 feet above normal, with large waves and swells   .
Revised:  Tides are about 2 feet above normal along the Louisiana, Mississippi, and Alabama coasts, and tides will increase to 4-6 feet above normal, with large waves and swells . .
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Original: The core of Hurricane Rita made landfall just west of the Texas-Louisiana border as a category 3 storm at 3 AM Saturday with sustained winds near 120 mph.
Revised: The core of made landfall just west of the Texas-Louisiana border as a category 3 storm at 3 AM Saturday with sustained winds near 120 mph.
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Original: The core of Hurricane Rita made landfall just west of the Texas-Louisiana border as a category 3 storm at 3 AM Saturday with sustained winds near 120 mph.
Revised: The core of Hurricane Rita made landfall just west of the – border as a category 3 storm at 3 AM Saturday with sustained winds near 120 mph.
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Original: The core of Hurricane Rita made landfall just west of the Texas-Louisiana border as a category 3 storm at 3 AM Saturday with sustained winds near 120 mph.
Revised: The core of Hurricane Rita made landfall just west of the Texas-Louisiana border as a storm at 3 AM Saturday with sustained winds near 120 mph.
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Original:  The center of the eye crossed the coast southeast of Beaumont , Texas, near Sabine Pass , with the eyewall extending into Louisiana.
Revised:  The center of the eye crossed the coast southeast of , Texas, near Sabine Pass , with the eyewall extending into Louisiana.
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Original:  Rita is expected to produce rainfall accumulations of 8-12 inches, with the storm slowing down and producing a total of as much as 25 inches across eastern Texas and western Louisiana.
Revised:  Rita is expected to produce rainfall accumulations of 8–12 inches, with the storm slowing down and producing a total of as much as 25 inches across eastern Texas and western Louisiana.
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Original:  Bursts of tropical storm winds and rainfall amounts of 3-5 inches are possible in New Orleans . Path forecast 5 hours before landfall.
Revised:  Bursts of tropical storm winds and rainfall amounts of 3–5 inches are possible in New Orleans . Path forecast 5 hours before landfall.
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Original:  Bursts of tropical storm winds and rainfall amounts of 3-5 inches are possible in New Orleans . Path forecast 5 hours before landfall.
Revised:  Bursts of tropical storm winds and rainfall amounts of 3-5 inches are possible in . Path forecast 5 hours before landfall.
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Original:  New Orleans' Ninth Ward, which saw as much as 20 feet of water during Hurricane Katrina , is currently in waist high water as a nearby levee was overtopped.
Revised:  New Orleans' Ninth Ward, which saw as much as 20 feet of water during , is currently in waist high water as a nearby levee was overtopped.
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Original:  In other cases, soldiers abused prisoners (known as Persons Under Control (PUCs) on their own initiative, in order to "relieve stress".
Revised:  In other cases, soldiers tortured prisoners (known as Persons Under Control (PUCs) on their own initiative, in order to "relieve stress".
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Original:  Warren was elected Mayor three years ago  said he would "vigorously defend" those who had been charged.
Revised:  Warren was elected Mayor three years ago and said he would "vigorously defend" those who had been charged.
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Original: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory  has seen about a third of it's male population face charges relating to child sex crimes.
Revised: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory , has seen about a third of it's male population face charges relating to child sex crimes.
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Original: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory  has seen about a third of it's male population face charges relating to child sex crimes.
Revised: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory has seen about a third of its male population face charges relating to child sex crimes.
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Original: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory  has seen about a third of it's male population face charges relating to child sex crimes.
Revised: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory has seen about a third of it's male population face charges related to child sex crimes.
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Original:   Warren was not one of the men arrested in the previous trails but did speak out against the charges and defended the men .
Revised:  Mayor Warren was not one of the men arrested in the previous trails but did speak out against the charges and defended the men .
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Original:   Warren was not one of the men arrested in the previous trails but did speak out against the charges and defended the men .
Revised:  Warren was not one of the men arrested in the previous trials, but did speak out against the charges and defended the men .
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Original:  Warren was elected Mayor three years ago and said he would "vigorously defend" those who had been charged .
Revised:  Warren was elected Mayor three years ago and said he would "vigorously defend" those who had been charged 
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Original:  He is due to appear at the islands magistrate court later this month to be sentenced
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Original: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory, has seen about a third of its male population face charges related to child sex crimes.
Revised: The Pitcairn Islands, which are home to around 50 people living in the territory, has seen about a third of its male population face charges related to child sex crimes.
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Original: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory, has seen about a third of its male population face charges related to child sex crimes.
Revised: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people , have seen about a third of its male population face charges related to child sex crimes.
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Original: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory, has seen about a third of its male population face charges related to child sex crimes.
Revised: The Pitcairn Islands, which has around 50 people living in the territory, has seen about a third of the male population face charges related to child sex crimes.
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Original:  Since 2004 the islands have seen two major cases , in 2004 and 2007.
Revised:  Since 2004 the islands have seen major cases in 2004 and 2007.
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Original:  In 2004, six men were charged with offensives against children as young as seven.
Revised:  In 2004, six men were charged with offences against children as young as seven.
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Original:  Three years later, two men were also charged in a similar case.
Revised:  Three years later, two men were charged in a similar case.
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Original:  Mayor Warren was not one of the men arrested in the previous trials, but did speak out against the charges and defended the men , one of whom was a former mayor of the Pitcairn Islands, Steve Christian.
Revised:  Mayor Warren was not involved in the previous trials, but did speak out against the charges and defended the men , one of whom was a former mayor of the Pitcairn Islands, Steve Christian.
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Original:  Mayor Warren was not one of the men arrested in the previous trials, but did speak out against the charges and defended the men , one of whom was a former mayor of the Pitcairn Islands, Steve Christian.
Revised:  Mayor Warren was not one of the men arrested in the previous trials, but did speak out against the charges and defended the accused , one of whom was a former mayor of the Pitcairn Islands, Steve Christian.
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Original:  Mayor Warren was not one of the men arrested in the previous trials, but did speak out against the charges and defended the men , one of whom was a former mayor of the Pitcairn Islands, Steve Christian.
Revised:  Mayor Warren was not one of the men arrested in the previous trials, but did speak out against the charges and defended the men , one of whom was former mayor Steve Christian.
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Original:  Warren was elected Mayor three years ago and said he would "vigorously defend" those who had been charged
Revised:  Warren was elected Mayor three years ago and said he would "vigorously defend" the suspects
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Original:  He was charged with twenty counts of possessing indecent images of children and five counts of possessing pornographic images, videos and documents all of which related to children.
Revised:  He was charged with twenty counts of possessing indecent images of children and five counts of possessing pornographic images, videos and documents concerning children.
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Original: File:Adamstown1.jpg|Adamstown, the capital of the Pitcairn Islands]] Michael Warren, the pedophile mayor of the Pitcairn Islands, has been arrested and charged with possessing images and videos of child pornography.
Revised: File:Adamstown1.jpg|Adamstown, the capital of the Pitcairn Islands]] Michael Warren, the mayor of the Pitcairn Islands, has been arrested and charged with possessing images and videos of child pornography.
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Original:  The unidentified 55-year-old male was thought to be travelling in his silver Peugeot vehicle when it was involved in the incident with the articulated tractor unit with tanker, which was coloured white and red .
Revised:  The unidentified 55-year-old male was thought to be travelling in his silver Peugeot motor vehicle collided with a red and white articulated truck and tanker .
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Original:  According to Humberside Police, the road traffic accident happened on the A15 road in the small village of Hibaldstow - within North Lincolnshire , England, United Kingdom - at approximately 0739 UTC on Saturday.
Revised:  According to Humberside Police, the road traffic accident happened on the A15 road in the small village of Hibaldstow , North Lincolnshire at approximately 0739 UTC on Saturday.
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Original:  Although the sole occupant of the Peugeot was fatally injured, the individual in the lorry was uninjured.
Revised:  Although the sole occupant of the Peugeot was fatally injured, the occupant of the lorry was uninjured.
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Original:  An investigation has now commenced to try and establish whether or not the icy and snowy weather conditions were a factor in this collision.
Revised:  An investigation has begun to try and establish whether or not the icy and snowy weather conditions were a factor in this collision.
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Original:  The police have commented that it is too early to state whether the weather conditions were a factor in this crash
Revised:  The police have commented that it is too early to know whether the weather conditions were a factor in this crash
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Original: According to  Humberside Police, the road traffic accident happened on the A15 road near the small village of Hibaldstow, North Lincolnshire at approximately 0739 UTC on Saturday.
Revised: According to the Humberside Police, the road traffic accident happened on the A15 road near the small village of Hibaldstow, North Lincolnshire at approximately 0739 UTC on Saturday.
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Original: A 55-year-old unidentified male died Saturday after his silver Peugeot motor vehicle collided with a red and white articulated truck and tanker on the A15 road near Hibaldstow, North Lincolnshire .
Revised: A 55-year-old unidentified male died Saturday after his silver Peugeot motor vehicle collided with a red and white articulated truck and tanker on the A15 road .
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Original:  An investigation has begun to try and establish whether or not the icy and snowy weather conditions were a factor in this collision.
Revised:  An investigation has begun to try to establish whether the icy and snowy weather conditions were a factor in this collision.
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Original: According to the Humberside Police, the road traffic accident happened on the w: A15 road (England)|A15 road near the small village of Hibaldstow, North Lincolnshire at approximately 0739 UTC on Saturday.
Revised: According to the Humberside Police, the road traffic accident happened on the A15 road (England)|A15 road near the small village of Hibaldstow, North Lincolnshire at approximately 0739 UTC on Saturday.
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Original: According to the Humberside Police, the road traffic accident happened on the w: A15 road (England)|A15 road near the small village of Hibaldstow, North Lincolnshire at approximately 0739 UTC on Saturday.
Revised: According to the Humberside Police, the road traffic accident happened on the w: A15 near the small village of Hibaldstow, North Lincolnshire at approximately 0739 UTC on Saturday.
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Original:  BT are working with the government to help provide internet access to people who are unable to get internet access.
Revised:  BT is working with the government to help provide internet access to people who are unable to get internet access.
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Original:  BT are working with the government to help provide internet access to people who are unable to get internet access.
Revised:  BT are working with the government to help provide internet access to people who are unable to get access.
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Original:  On 24 September it is grandparent's day in the United Kingdom and the Group plc (BT) is trying to persuade children to teach their grandparents how to use the net.
Revised:  On 24 September it is grandparent's day in the United Kingdom and BT Group plc is trying to persuade children to teach their grandparents how to use the net.
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Original: 200px It has been encouraged that young people (mainly children) take the role of an " internet trainer" in order to help teach older people skills on the net.
Revised: 200px It has been encouraged that young people (mainly children) take the role of an " Internet trainer" in order to help teach older people skills on the net.
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Original:  On 24 September it is grandparent's day in the United Kingdom and BT Group plc is trying to persuade children to teach their grandparents how to use the net.
Revised:  On 24 September it is Grandparents Day in the United Kingdom and BT Group plc is trying to persuade children to teach their grandparents how to use the net.
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Original: 200px It has been encouraged that young people (mainly children)  take the role of an "Internet trainer" in order to help teach older people skills on the net .
Revised: 200px Young people (mainly children) take the role of an "Internet trainer" in order to help teach older people skills on the net .
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Original: 200px It has been encouraged that young people (mainly children)  take the role of an "Internet trainer" in order to help teach older people skills on the net .
Revised: 200px It has been encouraged that young people (mainly children) are being encouraged to take the role of an "Internet trainer" in order to help teach older people skills on the net .
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Original: 200px It has been encouraged that young people (mainly children)  take the role of an "Internet trainer" in order to help teach older people skills on the net .
Revised: 200px It has been encouraged that young people (mainly children) take the role of "Internet trainer" in order to help teach older people skills on the net .
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Original:  On 24 September it is Grandparents Day in the United Kingdom  and BT Group plc is  trying to persuade children to teach their grandparents how to use the Net.
Revised:  On 24 September Grandparents Day is celebrated in the United Kingdom and BT Group plc is trying to persuade children to teach their grandparents how to use the Net.
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Original:  On 24 September it is Grandparents Day in the United Kingdom  and BT Group plc is  trying to persuade children to teach their grandparents how to use the Net.
Revised:  On 24 September it is Grandparents Day in the United Kingdom , and BT Group plc is trying to persuade children to teach their grandparents how to use the Net.
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Original:  The step is being made to help prevent them from becoming "digitally excluded".
Revised:  The step is being made to help prevent grandparents from becoming "digitally excluded".
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Original:  By the year 2025, around 23 million adults could miss out on what the Internet has to offer, according to BT.
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Original:  A web site, Internet Rangers, by BT, was recently launched with tools, activities and advice to assist children to help their grandparents make use of one of the world's most useful tools, the internet .
Revised:  A web site, Internet Rangers, by BT, was recently launched with tools, activities and advice to assist children with helping their grandparents make use of one of the world's most useful tools, the internet .
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Original:  The site links to BT's "Green X Code" telling kids how to stay safe on the Internet.
Revised:  The site links to BT's "Green X Code" of conduct which encourages kids to stay safe on the Internet.
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Original:  The site links to BT's "Green X Code" telling kids how to stay safe on the Internet.
Revised:  The site links to BT's "Green X Code" telling kids how to stay safe while accessing the Internet.
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Original:  Recent research shows that teenagers aged between 13 and 16 are encouraging their parents and grandparents to  surf the Net  
Revised:  Recent research shows that teenagers aged between 13 and 16 have been encouraging their parents and grandparents to surf the Net 
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Original:  Recent research shows that teenagers aged between 13 and 16 are encouraging their parents and grandparents to  surf the Net  
Revised:  Recent research shows that teenagers aged between 13 and 16 are encouraging their parents and grandparents to " surf the Net 
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Original:  Recent research shows that teenagers aged between 13 and 16 are encouraging their parents and grandparents to  surf the Net  
Revised:  Recent research shows that teenagers aged between 13 and 16 are encouraging their parents and grandparents to surf the Net ". 
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Original:  A  rumour that troops would attack  led to the killing
Revised:  A subsequent rumour that troops would attack led to the killing
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Original: The Thai Defense Minister, Thammarak Isarangkura na Ayudhya, has announced the arrest of three  suspected of involvement in the breating to death of two marines in the troubled south of the country.
Revised: The Thai Defense Minister, Thammarak Isarangkura na Ayudhya, announced the arrest of three suspected of involvement in the breating to death of two marines in the troubled south of the country.
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Original: The Thai Defense Minister, Thammarak Isarangkura na Ayudhya, has announced the arrest of three  suspected of involvement in the breating to death of two marines in the troubled south of the country.
Revised: The Thai Defense Minister, Thammarak Isarangkura na Ayudhya, has announced the arrest of three persons suspected of involvement in the breating to death of two marines in the troubled south of the country.
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