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Original:  चिमणरावाचे च-हाट आणखी चिमणराव तिसर्यांदा चिमणराव चौथे चिमणराव गुंड्याभाऊ मोरू आणि मैना विनोद चिंतामणी वायफळाचा मळा एरंडाचे गुर्‍हाळ ओसाडवाडीचे देव चार दिवस सुनेचे ना मारो पिचकारी घरबशे पळपुटे पाल्हाळ मेषपात्रे रहाटगाडगे लंकावैभव हापूस पायरी संचार बोरीबाभळी स्टेशनमास्तर आरसा संचार आमचा पण गाव सोळा आणे       
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Original:  चिमणरावाचे च-हाट आणखी चिमणराव तिसर्यांदा चिमणराव चौथे चिमणराव गुंड्याभाऊ मोरू आणि मैना विनोद चिंतामणी वायफळाचा मळा एरंडाचे गुर्‍हाळ ओसाडवाडीचे देव चार दिवस सुनेचे ना मारो पिचकारी घरबशे पळपुटे पाल्हाळ मेषपात्रे रहाटगाडगे लंकावैभव हापूस पायरी संचार बोरीबाभळी स्टेशनमास्तर आरसा संचार आमचा पण गाव सोळा आणे       
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Original:  चिमणरावाचे च-हाट आणखी चिमणराव तिसर्यांदा चिमणराव चौथे चिमणराव गुंड्याभाऊ मोरू आणि मैना विनोद चिंतामणी वायफळाचा मळा एरंडाचे गुर्‍हाळ ओसाडवाडीचे देव चार दिवस सुनेचे ना मारो पिचकारी घरबशे पळपुटे पाल्हाळ मेषपात्रे रहाटगाडगे लंकावैभव हापूस पायरी संचार बोरीबाभळी स्टेशनमास्तर आरसा संचार आमचा पण गाव सोळा आणे       
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Original:  चिमणरावाचे च-हाट आणखी चिमणराव तिसर्यांदा चिमणराव चौथे चिमणराव गुंड्याभाऊ मोरू आणि मैना विनोद चिंतामणी वायफळाचा मळा एरंडाचे गुर्‍हाळ ओसाडवाडीचे देव चार दिवस सुनेचे ना मारो पिचकारी घरबशे पळपुटे पाल्हाळ मेषपात्रे रहाटगाडगे लंकावैभव हापूस पायरी संचार बोरीबाभळी स्टेशनमास्तर आरसा संचार आमचा पण गाव सोळा आणे       
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Original:  Manual of Pali (in English) Jatakatil Nivadak Goshti (जातकातील निवडक गोष्टी)  Buddha Sampradaya (बुद्ध संप्रदाय) Shikawan (शिकवण) Adich Hajar Warshampurvicha Samaj (अडीच हजार वर्षांपूर्वीचा समाज) Ingraji Shishtachar (इंग्रजी शिष्टाचार) Samshayache Jale '' (संशयाचे जाळे) Joshi's humorous works include:
Revised:  Manual of Pali (in English) Jatakatil Nivadak Goshti (जातकातील निवडक गोष्टी) ' Buddha Sampradaya (बुद्ध संप्रदाय) Shikawan (शिकवण) Adich Hajar Warshampurvicha Samaj (अडीच हजार वर्षांपूर्वीचा समाज) Ingraji Shishtachar (इंग्रजी शिष्टाचार) Samshayache Jale '' (संशयाचे जाळे) Joshi's humorous works include:
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Original:  Manual of Pali (in English) Jatakatil Nivadak Goshti (जातकातील निवडक गोष्टी)  Buddha Sampradaya (बुद्ध संप्रदाय) Shikawan (शिकवण) Adich Hajar Warshampurvicha Samaj (अडीच हजार वर्षांपूर्वीचा समाज) Ingraji Shishtachar (इंग्रजी शिष्टाचार) Samshayache Jale '' (संशयाचे जाळे) Joshi's humorous works include:
Revised:  Manual of Pali (in English) Jatakatil Nivadak Goshti (जातकातील निवडक गोष्टी) Buddha Sampradaya (बुद्ध संप्रदाय) Shikawan (शिकवण) Adich Hajar Warshampurvicha Samaj (अडीच हजार वर्षांपूर्वीचा समाज) Ingraji Shishtachar (इंग्रजी शिष्टाचार) Samshayache Jale (संशयाचे जाळे) Joshi's humorous works include:
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Original:  A Marathi movie "Sarkari Pahune", 1942, directed by Master Vinayak, based on Joshi's writings became very successful and later so did a Doordarshan serial based on his writings.
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Original: 1892 births Category:1963 deaths Category:Marathi people Category:Writers from Pune Category:Marathi-language writers Category:Indian humorists Category:20th-century Indian short story writers Category:Marathi-language writers Category:1963 deaths Category:1892 birt
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Original: Malayalam screenwriters Category:Malayalam poets Category:Malayalam film producers Category:1908 births Category:2004 deaths Category:Recipients of the Ezhuthachan Award Category:20th-century Indian dramatists and playwrights Category:20th-century Indian short story writers Category:Film producers from Kerala Category:Indian male screenwriters Category:Indian male poets Category:20th-century Indian poets Category:People of the Kingdom of Travanco
Revised: Malayalam screenwriters Category:Malayalam poets Category:Malayalam film producers Category:1908 births Category:2004 deaths Category:Recipients of the Ezhuthachan Award Category:20th-century Indian dramatists and playwrights Category:20th-century Indian short story writers Category:Film producers from Kerala Category:Indian male screenwriters Category:Indian male poets Category:20th-century Indian poets Category:People of the Kingdom of Travancore Category:20th-century male write
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Original:  After high school studies he passed the Malayalam ' Vidwan ' examination;
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Original:  Kottayam His short story Sabdikkunna Kalappa has always been considered as one of the best short stories in Malayalam literature.
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Original: File:M N Satyardhi.jpg|alt=(എം എൻ സത്യാര്ധി)|thumbM N Sathyardhi M N Sathayrthi M.N. Sathyardhi (1913-1998) was a famous writer and freedom fighter from Kerala, India.
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Original: M N Sathayrthi M .N. Sathyardhi (1913-1998) was a famous writer and freedom fighter from Kerala, India.
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Original:  He took his Masters degree in Malayalam language and literature and served for forty years as Lecturer and Professor in various colleges.
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Original:  He took his master's degree in Malayalam language from kerala university and literature and served for forty years as Lecturer and Professor in various colleges.
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Original:  He is the first person from kerala to receive First rank in malayalam M.A with a second class in 1944.
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Original:  He is the youngr brother of Mahakavi K.M. Varghese .
Revised:  He is the brother of Mahakavi K.M. Varghese .
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Original:  He died on 18 July 1988 and surivied by his wife Annamma and 8 kids  .
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Original:  He died on 18 July 1988 and surivied by his wife Annamma and 8 kids  .
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Original:  Youngest son, Pradeep Daniel is a former Kerala cricket team captain .
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Original:  He died on 18 July 1988 and survived by his wife Annamma 8 kids.
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Original:  He was born in Chengannur in Alappuzha district in Kerala .
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Original:   Pradeep Daniel was a member of the Kerala Ranji Trophy Cricket and the captain of the Kerala Junior cricket team..
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Original:  Turkey relations, the Cyprus question, the Turkey - Armenia relations, US meetings reinvigorate Turkish-Armenian reconciliation Turkish - Arab dialogue, NATO, second track diplomacy between Syria and Israel, Arab-Israeli conflict and other issues related to the international agenda in general and the agenda of Turkish foreign policy in particular.
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Original: He was born in November 1920 in Puliyur, near Chengannur in Kottayamdistrict .
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Original: 200|Vaikom Chandrasekharan Nair Vaikom Chandrasekharan Nair (  1920 – 12 April 2005), popularly known as Vaikom  , was an Indian writer and journalist who wrote primarily in Malayalam.
Revised: 200|Vaikom Chandrasekharan Nair Vaikom Chandrasekharan Nair ( ; 1920 – 12 April 2005), popularly known as Vaikom , was an Indian writer and journalist who wrote primarily in Malayalam.
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Original: 200|Vaikom Chandrasekharan Nair Vaikom Chandrasekharan Nair (  1920 – 12 April 2005), popularly known as Vaikom  , was an Indian writer and journalist who wrote primarily in Malayalam.
Revised: 200|Vaikom Chandrasekharan Nair Vaikom Chandrasekharan Nair ( 1920 – 12 April 2005), popularly known as Vaikom () , was an Indian writer and journalist who wrote primarily in Malayalam.
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Original:  Articles which added in encyclopedia Thunchaththezhutahchan (In Encyclopedia published by Govt. of Kerala) The Artisan Classes of Kerala (Social history of Kerala) 
Revised:  Articles which added in encyclopedia Thunchaththezhutahchan (In Encyclopedia published by Govt. of Kerala) The Artisan Classes of Kerala (Social history of Kerala) .
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Original: Early life and education Nair was the eldest of three children born to P.A. Krishna Pillai, an advocate, and Gowri Thankamma  a housewife.
Revised: Early life and education Nair was the eldest of three children born to P.A. Krishna Pillai, an advocate, and Gowri Thankamma , a housewife.
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Original:  He was born at Trivandrum and died at New Delhi.
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Original:  He was born at Trivandrum and died at New Delhi.
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Original:  Montesinos subsequently emerged as the center  a vast web of illegal activities, including embezzlement, graft, drug trafficking, as well as human rights violations committed during the war against Sendero Luminoso.
Revised:  Montesinos subsequently emerged as the center of a vast web of illegal activities, including embezzlement, graft, drug trafficking, as well as human rights violations committed during the war against Sendero Luminoso.
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Original:  His successor was his first vice president, engineer Martín URL Vizcarra has announced publicly that he has no plans in seeking for re-election amidst the political crisis and instability.
Revised:  His successor was his first vice president, engineer Martín Vizcarra. Vizcarra has announced publicly that he has no plans in seeking for re-election amidst the political crisis and instability.
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Original:  His successor, interim president Manuel Merino, resigned after being in office for only five URL Merino was succeeded by interim president Francisco Sagasti, the third head of state in under a URL On 28 July 2021, radical left-wing Pedro Castillo was sworn in as the new President of Peru after a narrow win in a tightly contested run-off URL
Revised:  His successor, interim president Manuel Merino, resigned after being in office for only five URL Merino was succeeded by interim president Francisco Sagasti, the third head of state in under a URL On 28 July 2021, radical left-wing Pedro Castillo was sworn in as the new President of Peru after a narrow win in a tightly contested run-off election.
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Original:  The transfer of the presidency from Belaúnde to García on 28 July 1985 was Peru's first exchange of power from one democratically elected leader to another for the first time in 40 years.
Revised:  The transfer of the presidency from Belaúnde to García on 28 July 1985 was Peru's first exchange of power from one democratically elected leader to another in 40 years.
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Original:  "An Account of a Voyage up the River de la Plata, and Thence over Land to Peru: With Observations on the Inhabitants, as Well as Indians and Spaniards, the Cities, Commerce, Fertility, and Riches of That Part of America" from 1698 References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Historia del Peru".
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Original:  "An Account of a Voyage up the River de la Plata, and Thence over Land to Peru: With Observations on the Inhabitants, as Well as Indians and Spaniards, the Cities, Commerce, Fertility, and Riches of That Part of America" from 1698 References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Historia del Peru".
Revised:  "An Account of a Voyage up the River de la Plata, and Thence over Land to Peru: With Observations on the Inhabitants, as Well as Indians and Spaniards, the Cities, Commerce, Fertility, and Riches of That Part of America" from 1698 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Historia del Peru".
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Original: On 28 July 2021, radical left-wing Pedro Castillo was sworn in as the new President of Peru after a narrow win in a tightly contested run-off election .
Revised: On 28 July 2021, radical left-wing Pedro Castillo was sworn in as the new President of Peru after a narrow win in a tightly contested run-off election 
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Original:  See also History of Latin America History of South America History of the Americas Politics of Peru President of Peru Spanish colonization of the Americas Timeline of Peruvian history Viceroyalty of Peru%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading Dobyns, Henry F. and Paul L. Doughty, Peru: A cultural history.
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Original:  a social and biographical study of the first conquerors of Peru, Austin, Published for the Institute of Latin American Studies by the University of Texas Press%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 1972 Yupanqui, Titu Cusi.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Colonial era Andrien, Kenneth J. Crisis and Decline: The Viceroyalty of Peru in the Seventeenth Century.
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Original:  Post Independence era%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Blanchard, Peter.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Economic and labor history De Secada, C. Alexander G. "Arms, guano, and shipping: the WR Grace interests in Peru, 1865–1885".
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Original:  Historiography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bonilla, Heraclio.
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Original: Pawtograph refers to the creation of an animal's "signature" created from its paw .
Revised: A pawtograph is a print of an animal's "signature" created from its paw .
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Original: Pawtograph refers to the creation of an animal's "signature" created from its paw .
Revised: Pawtograph refers to the creation of an animal's paw, regarded in some contexts as equivalent to a human signature .
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Original:  It is advisable to use non-toxic stamp pads for this purpose.
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Original: Simon van den Bergh (October 26, 1819 in Geffen - April 6, 1907 in Rotterdam) was a Dutch businessperson.
Revised: Simon van den Bergh (October 26, 1819 in Geffen – April 6, 1907 in Rotterdam) was a Dutch businessperson.
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Original: Jim Pepper (June 18, 1941 – February 10, 1992) was a Kaw Nation jazz saxophonist, composer and singer of  Muscogee Native American heritage.
Revised: Jim Pepper (June 18, 1941 – February 10, 1992) was a Kaw Nation jazz saxophonist, composer and singer of Kaw and Muscogee Native American heritage.
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Original:  He was  musical director for Night of the First Americans, a Native American self-awareness benefit concert at the John F. Kennedy Center for the Performing Arts in Washington, D.C. in 1980 and played also at numerous powwows.
Revised:  He was a musical director for Night of the First Americans, a Native American self-awareness benefit concert at the John F. Kennedy Center for the Performing Arts in Washington, D.C. in 1980 and played also at numerous powwows.
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Original:  "Ryko at Fifteen." Billboard, October 10, 1998, p. R-4. He also worked with the Liberation Music Orchestra, Paul Motian' s quintet, Bob Moses, Marty Cook, Mal Waldron, David Friesen, Tony Hymas and Amina Claudine Myers, and toured Europe intensively throughout his career.
Revised:  "Ryko at Fifteen." Billboard, October 10, 1998, p. R-4. He also worked with the Liberation Music Orchestra, Paul Motian' s quintet, Bob Moses, Marty Cook, Mal Waldron, David Friesen, Tony Hymas and Amina Claudine Myers, and toured Europe extensively throughout his career.
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Original:  Motian described Pepper's playing as "post-Coltrane . "  Don Cherry (Choctaw/African American) was among those who encouraged Pepper to bring more of his Native culture into his music  and the two collaborated extensively.
Revised:  Motian described Pepper's playing as "post-Coltrane " Don Cherry (Choctaw/African American) was among those who encouraged Pepper to bring more of his Native culture into his music and the two collaborated extensively.
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Original:  Motian described Pepper's playing as "post-Coltrane . "  Don Cherry (Choctaw/African American) was among those who encouraged Pepper to bring more of his Native culture into his music  and the two collaborated extensively.
Revised:  Motian described Pepper's playing as "post-Coltrane . " . Don Cherry (Choctaw/African American) was among those who encouraged Pepper to bring more of his Native culture into his music and the two collaborated extensively.
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Original:  Motian described Pepper's playing as "post-Coltrane . "  Don Cherry (Choctaw/African American) was among those who encouraged Pepper to bring more of his Native culture into his music  and the two collaborated extensively.
Revised:  Motian described Pepper's playing as "post-Coltrane . " Don Cherry (Choctaw/African American) was among those who encouraged Pepper to bring more of his Native culture into his music , and the two collaborated extensively.
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Original:  Early life Jim Gilbert Pepper II was born on June 18, 1941, to Gilbert and Floy Pepper in Salem, Oregon.
Revised:  Early life Jim Pepper was born on June 18, 1941, to Gilbert and Floy Pepper in Salem, Oregon.
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Original:  In 2005 the Oregon Legislative Assembly honored the extraordinary accomplishments and musical legacy of Pepper.2005 Senate Joint Resolution 31 In 2008 the New York-based band Effi Briest released a version of Pepper's Newly-Wed Song as the B-side to their début single, Mirror Rim on Loog Records.
Revised:  In 2005 the Oregon Legislative Assembly honored the extraordinary accomplishments and musical legacy of Pepper.2005 Senate Joint Resolution 31 
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