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Original:  The idea was abandoned after being defeated in the senate and due to strong critism .
Revised:  The idea was abandoned after being defeated in the senate and due to strong criticism .
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Original:  Five board members are stepping down. 
Revised:  Five board members are stepping down. ..
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Original:  Five board members are stepping down. ..
Revised:  Five board members are stepping down. 
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Original:   Professor Clive Williams  director of terrorism studies at the Australian National University  says he has been provided with evidence, by an Indian colleague, to support the theory that bin Laden died of massive organ failure in April last year.
Revised:  Professor Clive Williams , director of terrorism studies at the Australian National University says he has been provided with evidence, by an Indian colleague, to support the theory that bin Laden died of massive organ failure in April last year.
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Original:   Professor Clive Williams  director of terrorism studies at the Australian National University  says he has been provided with evidence, by an Indian colleague, to support the theory that bin Laden died of massive organ failure in April last year.
Revised:  Professor Clive Williams director of terrorism studies at the Australian National University , says he has been provided with evidence, by an Indian colleague, to support the theory that bin Laden died of massive organ failure in April last year.
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Original:  He says it would not make a big difference if Bin Laden was dead.
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Original:  "But it does seem strange that Dr Zawahiri has been making all of the statements since then, and nothing's been heard from Bin Laden since I think the December of the year before." Professor Williams says even if Bin Laden was dead, it would not make that much difference as people would continue to fight for the things they believe he stood for.
Revised:  "But it does seem strange that Dr Zawahiri has been making all of the statements since then, and nothing's been heard from Bin Laden since I think the December of the year before." He says even if Bin Laden was dead, it would not make that much difference as people would continue to fight for the things they believe he stood for.
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Original:  "But it does seem strange that Dr Zawahiri has been making all of the statements since then, and nothing's been heard from Bin Laden since I think the December of the year before." Professor Williams says even if Bin Laden was dead, it would not make that much difference as people would continue to fight for the things they believe he stood for.
Revised:  "But it does seem strange that Dr Zawahiri has been making all of the statements since then, and nothing's been heard from Bin Laden since I think the December of the year before." Professor Williams says even if bin Laden was dead, it would not make that much difference as people would continue to fight for the things they believe he stood for.
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Original:  "But it does seem strange that Dr Zawahiri has been making all of the statements since then, and nothing's been heard from Bin Laden since I think the December of the year before." Professor Williams says even if Bin Laden was dead, it would not make that much difference as people would continue to fight for the things they believe he stood for.
Revised:  "But it does seem strange that Dr Zawahiri has been making all of the statements since then, and nothing's been heard from Bin Laden since I think the December of the year before." Professor Williams says even if Bin Laden was dead, it would not make much difference - as people would continue to fight for the things they believe he stood for.
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Original:  "It does seem reasonably convincing based on the evidence that I've been provided with that he's certainly either severely incapacitated or dead at this stage," Dr Williamssaid.
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Original:  Dr Williams said Ayman al-Zawahiri, bin Laden's deputy who was the target of a US air strike in Pakistan last week, has been making all statements on behalf of the terror network for the past year.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dr Williams said proving whether the terrorist leader was still alive might be impossible.
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Original:  Clive Williams, the Visiting Fellow at the Australian National University's Strategic and Defence Studies Centre said the information, which came from a former Indian intelligence officer whom he would not identify, was credible but impossible to confirm.
Revised:  Professor Williams, the Visiting Fellow at the Australian National University's Strategic and Defence Studies Centre said the information, which came from a former Indian intelligence officer whom he would not identify, was credible but impossible to confirm.
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Original:  It may simply be that we don't hear much about BIN LADEN again ...
Revised:  It may simply be that we don't hear much about Bin Laden again ...
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Original:  " From%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% reports that I have read of people who went to meet with him while he has been on the run, his diet was very frugal and they certainly weren't living very comfortably ... so it doesn't seem to me that unlikely that bin Laden could have suffered major organ failure and died.
Revised:  From%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% reports that I have read of people who went to meet with him while he has been on the run, his diet was very frugal and they certainly weren't living very comfortably ... so it doesn't seem to me that unlikely that bin Laden could have suffered major organ failure and died.
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Original:  " From%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% reports that I have read of people who went to meet with him while he has been on the run, his diet was very frugal and they certainly weren't living very comfortably ... so it doesn't seem to me that unlikely that bin Laden could have suffered major organ failure and died.
Revised:  " %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% reports that I have read of people who went to meet with him while he has been on the run, his diet was very frugal and they certainly weren't living very comfortably ... so it doesn't seem to me that unlikely that bin Laden could have suffered major organ failure and died.
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Original:  Image of Osama bin Laden, from the FBI's Most Wanted List Professor Clive Williams, director of terrorism studies at the Australian National University, says he has been provided with evidence, by an Indian colleague, to support the theory that bin Laden died of massive organ failure in April last year.
Revised:  Professor Clive Williams, director of terrorism studies at the Australian National University, says he has been provided with evidence, by an Indian colleague, to support the theory that bin Laden died of massive organ failure in April last year.
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Original: But he said, "Even if he ’ s dead, it will be almost impossible for Western authorities to prove it.
Revised: But he said, "Even if he ' s dead, it will be almost impossible for Western authorities to prove it.
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Original: Rooney was first to be heard mouthing off after the decision was took to give ronaldo his swearing at the referee at half time, and then continuing the tirade throughout the game as a string of bad decisions were taken which stripped united of their fluidity in the game.
Revised: Rooney was first to be heard mouthing off after the decision was taken to give Ronaldo his his marching orders. He was observed swearing at the referee at half time, and then continuing the tirade throughout the game as a string of bad decisions were taken which stripped united of their fluidity in the game.
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Original: Rooney was first to be heard mouthing off after the decision was took to give ronaldo his swearing at the referee at half time, and then continuing the tirade throughout the game as a string of bad decisions were taken which stripped united of their fluidity in the game.
Revised: Rooney was first to be heard mouthing off after the decision was took to give ronaldo his swearing at the referee at half time, and then continuing the tirade throughout the game as a string of bad decisions were taken which stripped United of their fluidity in the game.
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Original:  Despite the language from rooney being far from usual, a barrage of assaults were thrown to and from the referee and the striker right through the game.
Revised:  Despite the language from Rooney being far from usual, a barrage of assaults were thrown to and from the referee and the striker right through the game.
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Original:  After the decision was given to take off Christiano Ronaldo, ferguwson 's temper boiled and he was heard by many sat around him to call the referee a "f*cking tw*t" as well as calling his decisions a "f*cking disgrace".
Revised:  After the decision was given to take off Christiano Ronaldo, Ferguson 's temper boiled and he was heard by many sat around him to call the referee a "f*cking tw*t" as well as calling his decisions a "f*cking disgrace".
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Original: Rooney was first to be heard mouthing off after the decision was taken to give Ronaldo his his marching orders.
Revised: Rooney was first to be heard mouthing off after the decision was taken to give Ronaldo his marching orders.
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Original:  After a string of poor decisions being given in City's favour, and with the untimely booking of Ronaldo, both Ferguson and Rooney were pushed to their limits of patience, swearing out loud in disbelief.
Revised:  After a string of decisions (which the Red half of Manchester preceived to be unfair) being given in City's favour, and with the untimely booking of Ronaldo, both Ferguson and Rooney were pushed to their limits of patience, swearing out loud in disbelief.
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Original:  After a string of decisions (which the Red half of Manchester preceived to be unfair) being given in City's favour, and with the untimely booking of Ronaldo, both Ferguson and Rooney were pushed to their limits of patience, swearing out loud in disbelief.
Revised:  After a string of decisions (which the red half of Manchester preceived to be unfair) being given in City's favour, and with the untimely booking of Ronaldo, both Ferguson and Rooney were pushed to their limits of patience, swearing out loud in disbelief.
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Original:  After a string of decisions (which the Red half of Manchester preceived to be unfair) being given in City's favour, and with the untimely booking of Ronaldo, both Ferguson and Rooney were pushed to their limits of patience, swearing out loud in disbelief.
Revised:  After a string of decisions (which the Red half of Manchester perceived to be unfair) being given in City's favour, and with the untimely booking of Ronaldo, both Ferguson and Rooney were pushed to their limits of patience, swearing out loud in disbelief.
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Original:  He still maintained that the side defended well, despite the fact that new signings, Patrice Evra and Mikael Silvestre afforded City easy opportunities to slip goals in.
Revised:  He still maintained that the side defended well, despite the fact that new signing Patrice Evra and Mikael Silvestre afforded City easy opportunities to slip goals in.
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Original:  News reports from Pakistan on Tuesday say that at least 4 or 5 terrorists were killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike Friday in a northern village bordering Afghanistan that left 18 dead.
Revised:  Reports coming out of Pakistan say that at least 4 or 5 terrorists were killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike Friday in a northern village bordering Afghanistan that left 18 dead.
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Original:  News reports from Pakistan on Tuesday say that at least 4 or 5 terrorists were killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike Friday in a northern village bordering Afghanistan that left 18 dead.
Revised:  News reports from Pakistan on Tuesday say that at least 4 or 5 terrorist have been killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike Friday in a northern village bordering Afghanistan that left 18 dead.
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Original:  said on Tuesday that, "According to the available information at least four to five foreign elements had also been killed in the incident . "  He added that 10 to 12 foreign extremists had been invited to dinner in the village where U.S. intelligence believed that the top Al-Queda leutenant would be , but Zawahiri did not show up , and that the "dead bodies have been taken away by their companions to hide the real reason of the attack."
Revised:  said on Tuesday that, "According to the available information at least four to five foreign elements had also been killed in the incident , " He added that 10 to 12 foreign extremists had been invited to dinner in the village where U.S. intelligence believed that the top Al-Queda leutenant would be , but Zawahiri did not show up , and that the "dead bodies have been taken away by their companions to hide the real reason of the attack."
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Original:  said on Tuesday that, "According to the available information at least four to five foreign elements had also been killed in the incident . "  He added that 10 to 12 foreign extremists had been invited to dinner in the village where U.S. intelligence believed that the top Al-Queda leutenant would be , but Zawahiri did not show up , and that the "dead bodies have been taken away by their companions to hide the real reason of the attack."
Revised:  said on Tuesday that, "According to the available information at least four to five foreign elements had also been killed in the incident . " He added that 10 to 12 foreign extremists had been invited to dinner at the compound that Zawahiri was supposed to be at, but did not show up , and that the "dead bodies have been taken away by their companions to hide the real reason of the attack."
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Original:  said on Tuesday that, "According to the available information at least four to five foreign elements had also been killed in the incident . "  He added that 10 to 12 foreign extremists had been invited to dinner in the village where U.S. intelligence believed that the top Al-Queda leutenant would be , but Zawahiri did not show up , and that the "dead bodies have been taken away by their companions to hide the real reason of the attack."
Revised:  said on Tuesday that, "According to the available information at least four to five foreign elements had also been killed in the incident . " He added that 10 to 12 foreign extremists had been invited to dinner in the village where U.S. intelligence believed that the top Al-Queda leutenant would be , but Zawahiri did not show up and that the "dead bodies have been taken away by their companions to hide the real reason of the attack."
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Original:  Reports coming out of Pakistan say that at least 4 or 5 terrorist have been killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike on Friday that tageted the village of Damadola in the semi-autonomous agency of Bujar in the tribal region bordering Afghanistan.
Revised:  Reports from Pakistan say that at least 4 or 5 terrorist have been killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike on Friday that tageted the village of Damadola in the semi-autonomous agency of Bujar in the tribal region bordering Afghanistan.
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Original:  Reports coming out of Pakistan say that at least 4 or 5 terrorist have been killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike on Friday that tageted the village of Damadola in the semi-autonomous agency of Bujar in the tribal region bordering Afghanistan.
Revised:  Reports coming out of Pakistan say that at least 4 or 5 terrorist have been killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike on Friday . The attack targeted the village of Damadola in the semi-autonomous agency of Bujar in the tribal region bordering Afghanistan.
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Original:  Reports coming out of Pakistan say that at least 4 or 5 terrorist have been killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike on Friday that tageted the village of Damadola in the semi-autonomous agency of Bujar in the tribal region bordering Afghanistan.
Revised:  Reports coming out of Pakistan say that at least 4 or 5 terrorist have been killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike on Friday that tageted the village of Damadola in the semi-autonomous agency of Bujar , a tribal region bordering Afghanistan.
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Original:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but  failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials,  the attack was carried out by unmanned  aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
Revised:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, top Al-Queda operative Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials, the attack was carried out by unmanned aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
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Original:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but  failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials,  the attack was carried out by unmanned  aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
Revised:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invited to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials, the attack was carried out by unmanned aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
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Original:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but  failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials,  the attack was carried out by unmanned  aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
Revised:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village at the time of the strike, but failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials, the attack was carried out by unmanned aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
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Original:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but  failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials,  the attack was carried out by unmanned  aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
Revised:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but had failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials, the attack was carried out by unmanned aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
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Original:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but  failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials,  the attack was carried out by unmanned  aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
Revised:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported , according to unidentified intelligence officials, the attack was carried out by unmanned aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
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Original:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but  failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials,  the attack was carried out by unmanned  aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
Revised:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, Al-Quedas number 2 man Ayman al-Zawahiri was invied to a dinner in the village for the time of the strike, but failed to show up. U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials, that the attack was carried out by unmanned aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
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Original:  Reports from Pakistan say that at least 4 or 5 terrorist have been killed in the deadly U.S. airstrike on Friday .
Revised:  Reports from Pakistan say that at least four or five terrorists were killed in last Friday's airstrike .
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Original:  The attack targeted the village of Damadola in the semi-autonomous agency of Bujar, a tribal region bordering Afghanistan.
Revised:  The attack took place in the village of Damadola in the semi-autonomous agency of Bujar, a tribal region bordering Afghanistan.
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Original:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, top Al-Queda operative Ayman al-Zawahiri was invited to a dinner in the village at the time of the strike, but had failed to show up.
Revised:  According to unnamed Pakistani intelligence officials, top Al-Queda operative Ayman al-Zawahiri was invited to a dinner in the village at the time of the strike, but failed to show up.
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Original:  "According to the available information at least four to five foreign elements had also been killed in the incident," the Political Agent Fahim Wazir of Bujar said Tuesday.
Revised:  "According to the available information at least 4 to 5 foreign elements had also been killed in the incident," the Political Agent Fahim Wazir of Bujar said Tuesday.
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Original:  "It is regrettable that 18 local people lost their lives in the attack, but this fact also cannot be denied, that 10-12 foreign extremists had been invited on a dinner," the statement also said.
Revised:  "It is regrettable that 18 local people lost their lives in the attack, but this fact also cannot be denied, that 10 - 12 foreign extremists had been invited on a dinner," the statement also said.
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Original:  It is also believd that he did not attend the gathering but sent some of his aides instead.
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Original:  No word on the names of those terrorists killed . U.S officials are not clear if Zawahiri was killed or not.
Revised:  There has been no announcement regarding the names of those terrorists killed . U.S officials are not clear if Zawahiri was killed or not.
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Original:  No word on the names of those terrorists killed . U.S officials are not clear if Zawahiri was killed or not.
Revised:  No word on the names of those terrorists killed and
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Original:  DNA tests are  being done on the victims to make a final decision.
Revised:  DNA tests are still being done on the victims to make a final decision.
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Original:  U.S. news networks have reported  , according to unidentified intelligence officials, that the attack was carried out by unmanned drone aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
Revised:  U.S. news networks have reported that , according to unidentified intelligence officials, that the attack was carried out by unmanned drone aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
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