wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: China looks to launch it's second manned space mission in October, two years after it's first flight, a newspaper reported Friday.
Revised: China looks to launch its second manned space mission in October, two years after it's first flight, a newspaper reported Friday.
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Original: China looks to launch it's second manned space mission in October, two years after it's first flight, a newspaper reported Friday.
Revised: China looks to launch it's second manned space mission in October, two years after its first flight, a newspaper reported Friday.
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Original: ]] British jazz musician Sir John Dankworth, said to be "one of the totemic figures of British jazz" and "the first major jazz musician" by Jazzwise magazine, died at the age of 82 in the King Edward VII Hospital in London, England on Saturday after being hospitalised  for the last few months.
Revised: ]] British jazz musician Sir John Dankworth, said to be "one of the totemic figures of British jazz" and "the first major jazz musician" by Jazzwise magazine, died at the age of 82 in the King Edward VII Hospital in London, England on Saturday after being hospitalised with an undisclosed illness for the last few months.
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Original:  A statement that was released from the music venue said: "The Stables is greatly saddened by the news that one of its Founders & Life Presidents, Sir John Dankworth CBE has passed away on the day that The Stables celebrated its 40th birthday."  ]  A message placed on the Twitter page of present day jazz musician Jamie Cullum said: "Sir John Dankworth - a great man and one of our finest musicians and composers has died.
Revised:  A statement that was released from the music venue said: "The Stables is greatly saddened by the news that one of its Founders & Life Presidents, Sir John Dankworth CBE has passed away on the day that The Stables celebrated its 40th birthday." t] A message placed on the Twitter page of present day jazz musician Jamie Cullum said: "Sir John Dankworth - a great man and one of our finest musicians and composers has died.
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Original:  The wind and human activities in the arctic has stired up the foul contamination in the arctic.
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Original:  A study by Canadaian researchers finds that the chemical pollution in areas where  seabirds can be many times higher than in nearby regions.
Revised:  A study by Canadian researchers finds that the chemical pollution in areas where seabirds can be many times higher than in nearby regions.
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Original:  A study by Canadaian researchers finds that the chemical pollution in areas where  seabirds can be many times higher than in nearby regions.
Revised:  A study by Canadaian researchers finds that the chemical pollution in areas where there are seabirds can be many times higher than in nearby regions.
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Original: At the University of California at Berkely a scientist confirmed wednesday that a cluster of fossilized bones found in Silicon Valley are likely the remains of a Mammoth that  roamed the area  10,000 and 40,000 years ago.
Revised:  University of California at Berkely a scientist confirmed wednesday that a cluster of fossilized bones found in Silicon Valley are likely the remains of a Mammoth that roamed the area 10,000 and 40,000 years ago.
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Original: At the University of California at Berkely a scientist confirmed wednesday that a cluster of fossilized bones found in Silicon Valley are likely the remains of a Mammoth that  roamed the area  10,000 and 40,000 years ago.
Revised: At the University of California Berkely scientists confirmed on Wednesday that a cluster of fossilized bones found in Silicon Valley are likely the remains of a Mammoth that roamed the area 10,000 and 40,000 years ago.
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Original: At the University of California at Berkely a scientist confirmed wednesday that a cluster of fossilized bones found in Silicon Valley are likely the remains of a Mammoth that  roamed the area  10,000 and 40,000 years ago.
Revised: At the University of California at Berkely a scientist confirmed wednesday that a cluster of fossilized bones found in Silicon Valley are likely the remains of a mammoth roamed the area 10,000 and 40,000 years ago.
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Original: At the University of California at Berkely a scientist confirmed wednesday that a cluster of fossilized bones found in Silicon Valley are likely the remains of a Mammoth that  roamed the area  10,000 and 40,000 years ago.
Revised: At the University of California at Berkely a scientist confirmed wednesday that a cluster of fossilized bones found in Silicon Valley are likely the remains of a Mammoth that roamed the area between 10,000 and 40,000 years ago.
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Original:  A palentoligist said they see a pair of elephant like tusks sticking out the ground.
Revised:  A palaeontologist said they fpund a pair of elephant like tusks sticking out the ground.
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Original:  A palentoligist said they see a pair of elephant like tusks sticking out the ground.
Revised:  A palentoligist said they see a pair of elephant-like tusks emerging out the ground.
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Original:  It might be the remains of a columbian Mammoth
Revised:  It could be the remains of a columbian Mammoth
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Original:  It might be the remains of a columbian Mammoth
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Original:  A palaeontologist said that they found a pair of elephant-like tusks emerging out the ground .
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Original:  It could be the remains of a Columbian mammoth 
Revised:  It could be the remains of a Columbian mammoth , according to paleontologists who expect to study the site like an archeological "dig," with shovels, sieves and brushes, during the summer of 2005
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Original: thumbnail|Asteroid 1950 DA, radar image Researcher team from the , , has found that with a of 1.1 km is held together by between the fine of similar to the material on the surface of the .
Revised: thumbnail|Asteroid 1950 DA, radar image A team of researchers from the , , has found that with a of 1.1 km is held together by between the fine of similar to the material on the surface of the .
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Original:  Their study "Cohesive forces prevent the rotational breakup of rubble-pile asteroid (29075) 1950DA" was published this Wednesday in .
Revised:  Their study was published Wednesday in .
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Original:  As spin rate increases due to YORP effect, the centrifugal force may cause the rubble pile to eventually separate as it happened with .
Revised:  But as the spin rate increases due to YORP effect, the centrifugal force may cause the rubble pile to eventually separate as it happened with .
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Original:  Lunar regolith has been found in by the expedition }} to be highly cohesive because of van der Waals forces between grains  .
Revised:  Lunar regolith has been found in by the expedition }}. Lunar regolith was found to be highly cohesive because of van der Waals forces between grains .
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Original:  Lunar regolith has been found in by the expedition }} to be highly cohesive because of van der Waals forces between grains  .
Revised:  Lunar regolith has been found in by the expedition }} to be highly cohesive because of van der Waals forces between grains by the expedition in .
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Original:  The study was supported by , and the . with a of 1.1 km between the fine of similar to the material on the surface of the
Revised:  The study was supported by , and the . 
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Original:  They have shown that the of the 1.1 km asteroid is higher than could be possible if only and were responsible for holding it together. prevent largescale of material and breakup of the asteroid.
Revised:  They have shown that the of the 1.1 km asteroid is higher than could be possible if only and were responsible for holding it together. prevent large scale of material and breakup of the asteroid.
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Original:   ]    Taking into account measurements  , presence of a fine-grained is implied  . Negative near the equator of the asteroid  requires existence of to prevent loss of material.
Revised:  ...] Taking into account measurements , presence of a fine-grained is implied . Negative near the equator of the asteroid requires existence of to prevent loss of material.
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Original:   ]    Taking into account measurements  , presence of a fine-grained is implied  . Negative near the equator of the asteroid  requires existence of to prevent loss of material.
Revised:  ] Taking into account measurements of , presence of a fine-grained is implied . Negative near the equator of the asteroid requires existence of to prevent loss of material.
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Original:   The balance between and requires small grain sizes consistent with the grain size distribution on 1950DA, and similar to that of another rubble-pile asteroid, . Unlike Itokawa, 1950DA does not have large boulders on the surface;
Revised:  The balance between and requires small grain sizes consistent with the grain size distribution on 1950DA, and similar to that of another rubble-pile asteroid, . Unlike Itokawa, 1950DA does not have large s on the surface;
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Original:  This effect results in a change of the rotation rate of an asteroid (either faster or slower), and is caused when the sun heats up an object unevenly, due to asymmetric surface topography .
Revised:  This effect results in a change of the rotation rate of an asteroid (either faster or slower), and is caused when the heats up an object unevenly, due to asymmetric surface topography .
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Original:  This effect results in a change of the rotation rate of an asteroid (either faster or slower), and is caused when the sun heats up an object unevenly, due to asymmetric surface topography .
Revised:  This effect results in a change of the rotation rate of an asteroid (either faster or slower), and is caused when the sun heats up an object unevenly, due to asymmetric surface .
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Original: As Daniel Scheeres, an at the , , mentioned , understanding such cohesive forces may also be important for future .
Revised: According to Daniel Scheeres, an at the , , mentioned , understanding such cohesive forces may also be important for future .
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Original: As Daniel Scheeres, an at the , , mentioned , understanding such cohesive forces may also be important for future .
Revised: As Daniel Scheeres, an at the , , understanding such cohesive forces may also be important for future .
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Original:  Lebanese officials, however, say it's too early to conclude the crash was due to pilot error  
Revised:  Lebanese officials, however, say it's too early to conclude the crash was due to pilot error . 
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Original:  Lebanese officials, however, say it's too early to conclude the crash was due to pilot error  
Revised:  Lebanese officials, however, say it's too early to conclude the crash was due to pilot error Related new
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Original: The black box  from an Ethiopian Airlines flight that crashed into the Mediterranean several weeks ago, killing all 90 people on board, has been found by search crews.
Revised: The black box from an Ethiopian Airlines flight that crashed into the Mediterranean several weeks ago, killing all on board, has been found by search crews.
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Original:  Flight ET409, which had departed from Beirut, Lebanon, was bound for Addis Ababa in Ethiopia on January 25 when it crashed into the waters of the Mediterranean Sea several minutes after takeoff, in inclement weather.
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Original:  "We found it and retrieved it about an hour ago today," Lebanese army Brigadier Saleh Haj Suleiman  , as quoted by BusinessWeek.
Revised:  "We found it and retrieved it about an hour ago today," Lebanese army Brigadier Saleh Haj Suleiman said , as quoted by BusinessWeek.
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Original:  Lebanese officials, however, say it's too early to conclude the crash was due to pilot error    .
Revised:  Lebanese officials, however, say it's too early to conclude the crash was due to pilot error . .
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Original:  All ninety people aboard were killed   .
Revised:  All ninety people aboard were killed . .
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Original:  The black box cockpit voice recorder from an Ethiopian Airlines flight that crashed into the Mediterranean several weeks ago, killing all on board, has been found by search crews.
Revised: Depsite the nickname, black boxes are usually painted orange to aid in their recovery after a crash The black box cockpit voice recorder from an Ethiopian Airlines flight that crashed into the Mediterranean several weeks ago, killing all on board, has been found by search crews.
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Original:  The focus now turns to recovering bodies of the crash victims.
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Original:  It was thought that this dolphin was a Irrawady dolphin usually found in Asia and Australia  but DNA tests prove that it is  a different species.
Revised:  It was thought that this dolphin was a Irrawady dolphin usually found in Asia and Australia ) but DNA tests prove that it is a different species.
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Original:  It was thought that this dolphin was a Irrawady dolphin usually found in Asia and Australia  but DNA tests prove that it is  a different species.
Revised:  It was thought that this dolphin was a Irrawady dolphin usually found in Asia and Australia but DNA tests prove that it is in fact a different species.
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Original:  It's scientific name is Orcaella heinsohni in honor of George Heinsohn
Revised:  Its scientific name is Orcaella heinsohni in honor of George Heinsohn
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Original:  He has also received five tickets within three months in 2008 for driving violations, including " speeding, driving without insurance, transportation of an open alcohol container, and driving too fast for conditions.
Revised:  He has also received five tickets within three months in 2008 for driving violations, including speeding, driving without insurance, transportation of an open alcohol container, and driving too fast for conditions.
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Original:  " Bensfield's mother also has an order of protection against him.
Revised:  Bensfield's mother also has an order of protection against him.
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Original:  Ms. Bensfield has also stated that he "suffers from bipolar disorder and has not been taking his medication  " 
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Original:  Ms. Bensfield has also stated that he "suffers from bipolar disorder and has not been taking his medication  " 
Revised:  Ms. Bensfield has also stated that he "suffers from bipolar disorder and has not been taking his medication , " 
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Original: Novak called Rove on a Tuesday, 6 days before he broke the story , and said he had information that Plame was an agent.
Revised: Novak called Rove on a Tuesday, 6 days before he broke the story . During the Novak-Rove conversation, Novak asked whether Rove heard Plame was an agent.
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Original:  At that time, Rove believed he might have heard the same information concerning Plame’s agent status from another reporter …
Revised:  At that time, Rove said he believed that he might have heard the same information concerning Plame’s agent status from another reporter …
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Original:  At that time, Rove believed he might have heard the same information concerning Plame’s agent status from another reporter …
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Original:  During the Novak-Rove conversation, Novakasked whether Rove heard Plame was an agent, and Rove agreed in some way.
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Original:  Novak’s story on Plame breaks 6 days after Rove conversation and cites 2 white house officials as anonymous sources Rove’s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson’s Op-Ed piece in a New York Times that ran July 6, 2003.
Revised:  Novak’s story on Plame breaks 6 days after the Rove conversation. Two anonymous White House officials are its sources. Rove’s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson’s Op-Ed piece in a New York Times that ran July 6, 2003.
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Original:  Novak’s story on Plame breaks 6 days after Rove conversation and cites 2 white house officials as anonymous sources Rove’s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson’s Op-Ed piece in a New York Times that ran July 6, 2003.
Revised:  Novak’s story on Plame breaks 6 days after Rove conversation and cites 2 white house officials as anonymous sources Rove’s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson’s Op-Ed piece in The New York Times that ran July 6, 2003.
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Original:  Novak’s story on Plame breaks 6 days after Rove conversation and cites 2 white house officials as anonymous sources Rove’s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson’s Op-Ed piece in a New York Times that ran July 6, 2003.
Revised:  Novak’s story on Plame breaks 6 days after Rove conversation and cites 2 white house officials as anonymous sources Rove’s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson’s Op-Ed piece in a New York Times ran on July 6, 2003.
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Original:  Rove  conversation with Cooper takes place 4 days after talking to Novak.
Revised:  Rove 's conversation with Cooper takes place 4 days after talking to Novak.
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Original: Therefore, Rove did speak to both Novak and Cooper before the Plame "leak" story broke.
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Original:  Therefore, a reader who wants to create a timeline of events is presented with the following puzzle (one date is provided by WN, the date of Wilson's Op-Ed piece):
Revised:  Therefore, a reader who wanted to create a timeline of events is presented with the following puzzle (one date is provided by WN, the date of Wilson's Op-Ed piece):
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Original:  So the Novak story broke on July 13 , 2003.
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Original:  he wasn’ t sure if he did, and if he did, he couldn ’ t remember who it was.
Revised:  he wasn’ t sure if he did, and if he did, he couldn ' t remember who it was.
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Original:  Novak ’ s story containing the Plame "leak" breaks 6 days after the Rove conversation.
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Original:  Rove ’ s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson ’ s Op-Ed piece in The New York Times ran on July 6, 2003.
Revised:  Rove ' s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson ’ s Op-Ed piece in The New York Times ran on July 6, 2003.
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Original:  Rove ’ s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson ’ s Op-Ed piece in The New York Times ran on July 6, 2003.
Revised:  Rove ’ s conversation with Cooper took place 5 days after Wilson ' s Op-Ed piece in The New York Times ran on July 6, 2003.
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Original:  Insurgencies continue, the drug lords still control large parts of the country, and the country is still split along ethic divides.
Revised:  Insurgencies continue, the drug lords still control large parts of the country, and the country is still split along ethnic divides.
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Original:  But the peaceful vote is still seen by most as proof that Afghanistan is on the right way, and  hopes that this will show that democracy is possible  .
Revised:  But the peaceful vote is still seen by most as proof that Afghanistan is on the right way, and many hopes that this will show that democracy is possible .
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Original:  But the peaceful vote is still seen by most as proof that Afghanistan is on the right way, and  hopes that this will show that democracy is possible  .
Revised:  But the peaceful vote is still seen by most as proof that Afghanistan is on the right way, and hopes that this will show that democracy is possible in Afghanistan .
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Original: The JEMB declared that Mr. Hamid Karzai got 55 percent of the vote, which took place on 9 October.
Revised: The Joint Electoral Management Body declared that Mr. Hamid Karzai got 55 percent of the vote, which took place on 9 October.
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Original:  The Joint Electoral Management Body declared that Mr. Hamid Karzai won 55 percent of the vote in the election which occurred on 9 October 2004.
Revised:  The Joint Electoral Management Body declared that Mr. Hamid Karzai won 55 percent of the vote in the election .
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Original:  The increase in food miles between 1992 and 2002 was associated with increasing levels of congestion and increasing emmissions of greenhouse gases while emmissions of some local pollutants such as SOx and NOx have declined.
Revised:  The increase in food miles between 1992 and 2002 was associated with increasing levels of congestion and increasing emissions of greenhouse gases while emmissions of some local pollutants such as SOx and NOx have declined.
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Original: Commander Ali Dizaei of London's Metropolitan Police today became the most senior officer anywhere in the United Kingdom to be convicted of offenses by a court.
Revised: Commander Ali Dizaei of London's Metropolitan Police today became the most senior officer anywhere in the United Kingdom to be convicted of offences by a court.
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Original:  Dizaei, who was branded a "criminal in uniform" by Independant Police Complaints Comission chair Nick Hardwick, has been jailed for four years after he attempted to frame an Iraqi businessman.
Revised:  Dizaei, who was branded a "criminal in uniform" by Independent Police Complaints Commission chair Nick Hardwick, has been jailed for four years after he attempted to frame an Iraqi businessman.
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Original:  Judge Justice Simon said that Dizaei had comitted a "grave breach of public trust" and told him "This sentence needs to send a clear message that police officers of whatever rank are not above the law."
Revised:  Judge Justice Simon said that Dizaei had committed a "grave breach of public trust" and told him "This sentence needs to send a clear message that police officers of whatever rank are not above the law."
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Original: Commander Ali Dizaei of London's Metropolitan Police  today became the most senior officer anywhere in the United Kingdom to be convicted of offences by a court.
Revised: Commander Ali Dizaei of London's Metropolitan Police Service today became the most senior officer anywhere in the United Kingdom to be convicted of offences by a court.
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Original:  "[I] if he [Dizaei] had been successful, Mr al-Baghdadi may have been sent to prison," noted Hardwick.
Revised:  "[I] f he [Dizaei] had been successful, Mr al-Baghdadi may have been sent to prison," noted Hardwick.
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Original:  Dr  Nat Cary said it was based on a "fundamentally flawed approach," and that the injuries were consistent with Dizaei's version of events.
Revised:  Dr . Nat Cary said it was based on a "fundamentally flawed approach," and that the injuries were consistent with Dizaei's version of events.
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Original:  He has helped investigate the assassination of Benazir Bhutto and newspaper seller Ian Thomlinson, killed during a G20 protest.
Revised:  He has helped investigate the assassination of Benazir Bhutto and newspaper seller Ian Thomlinson, the latter of whom died during a G20 protest.
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