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Original:  “ [Egypt] invites the Israelis and Palestinians for an urgent meeting to reach arrangements and guarantees that would not allow the repeat of the current escalation, ” Mr. Mubarak said.
Revised:  “ [Egypt] invites the Israelis and Palestinians for an urgent meeting to reach arrangements and guarantees that would not allow the repeat of the current escalation, " Mr. Mubarak said.
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Original:  While denying that there is a crisis in the Gaza Strip, the office of Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert will open what it calls a “humanitarian corridor” into the territory.
Revised:  While denying that there is a crisis in the Gaza Strip, the office of Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert will open what it calls a "humanitarian corridor" into the territory.
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Original:  “ This involves opening up geographical areas for limited periods of time during which the population will be able to receive the aid and stock up, ” the office said  
Revised:  " This involves opening up geographical areas for limited periods of time during which the population will be able to receive the aid and stock up, ” the office said 
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Original:  “ This involves opening up geographical areas for limited periods of time during which the population will be able to receive the aid and stock up, ” the office said  
Revised:  “ This involves opening up geographical areas for limited periods of time during which the population will be able to receive the aid and stock up, " the office said 
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Original:  “ This involves opening up geographical areas for limited periods of time during which the population will be able to receive the aid and stock up, ” the office said  
Revised:  “ This involves opening up geographical areas for limited periods of time during which the population will be able to receive the aid and stock up, ” the office said . 
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Original:  Israel began invading Gaza four days ago (Jan 3) . "The loss of civilian life in Gaza and Israel is a source of deep concern for me," said US President-elect Barack Obama.
Revised:  Israel began invading Gaza four days ago . "The loss of civilian life in Gaza and Israel is a source of deep concern for me," said US President-elect Barack Obama.
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Original:  Israel began invading Gaza four days ago (Jan 3) . "The loss of civilian life in Gaza and Israel is a source of deep concern for me," said US President-elect Barack Obama.
Revised:  Israel began invading Gaza four days ago (Jan 3) . "The loss of civilian life in Gaza and Israel is a source of deep concern for me," said United States President-elect Barack Obama.
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Original:  Israel began ground operations  Gaza four days ago.
Revised:  Israel began ground operations in Gaza four days ago.
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Original: Control of Al-Aqsa Mosque and the Dome of the Rock was debated by Israeli parliament and Jordanian parliament.
Revised: Control of holy sites in the Old City of Jerusalem was debated by Israeli parliament and Jordanian parliament.
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Original:  The holy site is significant to both Jews and Muslims, however only Muslims are currently allowed to pray there.
Revised:  The holy site is significant to both Jews and Muslims, however Muslims currently have control there.
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Original:  This , being the topic up for debate, could get in the way of peace talks.
Revised:  This being a topic up for debate, could get in the way of peace talks.
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Original: A girls' school bus wrecked on the way to a field trip due to bad breaks or the bus driver fell asleep, which killed fifteen students in Thailand today.
Revised: A girls' school bus wrecked on the way to a field trip due either to bad brakes or the bus driver fell asleep, which killed fifteen students in Thailand today.
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Original: A girls' school bus wrecked on the way to a field trip due to bad breaks or the bus driver fell asleep, which killed fifteen students in Thailand today.
Revised: A girls' school bus wrecked on the way to a field trip due to bad breaks or the bus driver falling asleep, which killed fifteen students in Thailand today.
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Original: What was originally mistaken for fish bubbling underwater was actually discovered to be evidence of natural gas in the Gaza Strip this week .
Revised: What was originally mistaken for fish bubbling underwater was actually discovered to be evidence of natural gas in the Gaza Strip .
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Original:  The seven-year-old's  was found close to her home in the Old Exchange Building in Sunderland, England with thirty-seven stab wounds and blunt force trauma to the head from a brick.
Revised:  The seven-year-old's body was found close to her home in the Old Exchange Building in Sunderland, England with thirty-seven stab wounds and blunt force trauma to the head from a brick.
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Original: Arabs react to Israeli debate on Jerusalem's Holy sites Control of holy sites in the Old City of Jerusalem was debated by Israeli parliament.
Revised:  Control of holy sites in the Old City of Jerusalem was debated by Israeli parliament.
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Original:  Deputy Hamas Prime Minister Mr. Ziad Al-Zaza said, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% W e need to conduct further studies to confirm that there is any gas...
Revised:  Deputy Hamas Prime Minister Mr. Ziad Al-Zaza said, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% e need to conduct further studies to confirm that there is any gas...
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Original:  Two groups of independent researchers discovered the AP2-G protein is directly responsible for transmission          ] .
Revised:  Two groups of independent researchers discovered the AP2-G protein is directly responsible for transmission . ] .
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Original: ]] An internal email leaked to industry website Gamasutra on Tuesday revealed that Electronic Gaming Monthly was to be closed following the acquisition of the online element of the 1UP network by Hearst Corporation , and that the January 2009 issue would be the final  issue of EGM    .
Revised: ]] An internal email leaked to industry website Gamasutra on Tuesday revealed that Electronic Gaming Monthly was to be closed following the acquisition of the online element of the 1UP network by Hearst Corporation , and that the January 2009 issue would be the final printed issue of EGM .
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Original:   Electronic Gaming Monthly was an American consumer video game magazine mainstay since 1989.
Revised:  Electronic Gaming Monthly was an American consumer video game magazine mainstay .
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Original:  File:Fabio_Lanzoni_with_nephews.jpg|EGM's third issue in 1989 famously featured a then-obscure Fabio Lanzoni on the cover for the game Ironsword: Wizards Warriors II
Revised:  File:Fabio_Lanzoni_with_nephews.jpg|EGM's third issue in 1989 Warriors II
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Original:  I had 236 issues total, since 1989 
Revised:  It published 236 issues total, since 1989 
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Original:  I had 236 issues total, since 1989 
Revised:  I had 236 issues total, since 1989. 
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Original:  In 2008, the company closed 27-year Games for Windows Magazine, or w:Computer Gaming WorldComputer Gaming World.
Revised:  In 2008, the company closed 27-year Games for Windows Magazine, or Computer Gaming World.
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Original:  In late 2006, Ziff-Davis also shut down its Official U.S. PlayStation Magazine, while its Xbox-focused XBN and Electronics Boutique in-store mag GMR were terminated in 2004
Revised:  In late 2006, Ziff-Davis also shuttered its Official U.S. PlayStation Magazine, while its Xbox-focused XBN and Electronics Boutique in-store mag GMR were terminated in 2004
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Original: ]]  An internal email leaked to industry website Gamasutra on Tuesday revealed that Electronic Gaming Monthly was to be closed following the acquisition of the online element of the 1UP network by Hearst Corporation's UGO Networks and that the January 2009 issue (with Wolverine on the cover) would be the final printed issue of EGM . Ziff Davis's sale, brokered by GCA Savvian Advisors also includes Mycheats.com, Gametab.com, and GameVideos.com.
Revised: ]] An internal email leaked to industry website Gamasutra on Tuesday revealed that EGM was to be closed following the acquisition of the online element of the 1UP network by Hearst Corporation's UGO Networks and that the January 2009 issue (with Wolverine on the cover) would be the final printed issue of EGM . Ziff Davis's sale, brokered by GCA Savvian Advisors also includes Mycheats.com, Gametab.com, and GameVideos.com.
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Original: ]]  An internal email leaked to industry website Gamasutra on Tuesday revealed that Electronic Gaming Monthly was to be closed following the acquisition of the online element of the 1UP network by Hearst Corporation's UGO Networks and that the January 2009 issue (with Wolverine on the cover) would be the final printed issue of EGM . Ziff Davis's sale, brokered by GCA Savvian Advisors also includes Mycheats.com, Gametab.com, and GameVideos.com.
Revised: ]] An internal email leaked to industry website Gamasutra on Tuesday revealed that Electronic Gaming Monthly was to be closed following the acquisition of the online element of the 1UP network by Hearst Corporation's UGO Entertainment and that the January 2009 issue (with Wolverine on the cover) would be the final printed issue of EGM . Ziff Davis's sale, brokered by GCA Savvian Advisors also includes Mycheats.com, Gametab.com, and GameVideos.com.
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Original: ]]  An internal email leaked to industry website Gamasutra on Tuesday revealed that Electronic Gaming Monthly was to be closed following the acquisition of the online element of the 1UP network by Hearst Corporation's UGO Networks and that the January 2009 issue (with Wolverine on the cover) would be the final printed issue of EGM . Ziff Davis's sale, brokered by GCA Savvian Advisors also includes Mycheats.com, Gametab.com, and GameVideos.com.
Revised: ]] An internal email leaked to industry website Gamasutra on Tuesday revealed that Electronic Gaming Monthly was to be closed following the acquisition of the online element of the 1UP network by Hearst Corporation's UGO Networks and that the January 2009 issue (with Wolverine on the cover) would be the final printed issue of of the iconic magazine . Ziff Davis's sale, brokered by GCA Savvian Advisors also includes Mycheats.com, Gametab.com, and GameVideos.com.
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Original:  A UGO spokesman explained that "the reality is that UGO Entertainemnt is saving over 25 jobs, the company is retaining a core group of editorial all-star performers." Ziff Davis Holdings Inc (ZFDH.PK), which publishes EGM and about 15 Web sites, obtained Manhattan, New York Court Judge Burton Lifland's approval of a reorganization plan under Chapter 11, Title 11, United States Code based on its March bankruptcy protection petition.
Revised:  A UGO spokesman explained that "the reality is that UGO Entertainment is saving over 25 jobs, the company is retaining a core group of editorial all-star performers." Ziff Davis Holdings Inc (ZFDH.PK), which publishes EGM and about 15 Web sites, obtained Manhattan, New York Court Judge Burton Lifland's approval of a reorganization plan under Chapter 11, Title 11, United States Code based on its March bankruptcy protection petition.
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Original:  A UGO spokesman explained that "the reality is that UGO Entertainemnt is saving over 25 jobs, the company is retaining a core group of editorial all-star performers." Ziff Davis Holdings Inc (ZFDH.PK), which publishes EGM and about 15 Web sites, obtained Manhattan, New York Court Judge Burton Lifland's approval of a reorganization plan under Chapter 11, Title 11, United States Code based on its March bankruptcy protection petition.
Revised:  A UGO spokesman explained that "the reality is that UGO Entertainemnt is saving over 25 jobs, the company is retaining a core group of editorial all-star performers." Ziff Davis Holdings Inc (ZFDH.PK), which publishes EGM and about 15 Web sites, obtained Manhattan, New York Court Judge Burton Lifland's approval of a reorganization plan under Chapter 11, Title 11, United States Code . It was able, therefore, to emerge from it duly filed March bankruptcy protection petition.
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Original:  EGM was one issue off from its 20th anniversary , February 2009.
Revised:  EGM was one issue away from its 20th anniversary , February 2009.
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Original:  EGM was one issue off from its 20th anniversary , February 2009.
Revised:  EGM was one issue off from its 20th anniversary in February 2009.
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Original: ] UGO Entertainment CEO, J Moses left a sad note on EGM's gaming legacy, saying, "since we started UGO 11 years ago, we have served the gamer community and built a world-class online publishing platform." Ziff Davis Media CEO Jason Young further noted: "We believe this is a smart transaction for Ziff Davis Media that places these market leading assets and teams in a great environment poised for further success.
Revised: ] UGO Entertainment CEO, J Moses left a note on EGM's gaming legacy, saying, "since we started UGO 11 years ago, we have served the gamer community and built a world-class online publishing platform." Ziff Davis Media CEO Jason Young further noted: "We believe this is a smart transaction for Ziff Davis Media that places these market leading assets and teams in a great environment poised for further success.
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Original:  An 22-member team of experts from three United Nations agencies arrived in Manila on Tuesday for a joint risk assessment on the virus contamination of local swine, to help the government contain the outbreak.
Revised:  A 22-member team of experts from three United Nations agencies arrived in Manila on Tuesday for a joint risk assessment on the virus contamination of local swine, to help the government contain the outbreak.
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Original:  The mission will coordinate with the Philippine counterparts - the Department of Agriculture and Department of Health.
Revised:  The mission will coordinate with the Philippine counterparts - the Departments of Agriculture and Department of Health.
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Original:  The mission will coordinate with the Philippine counterparts - the Department of Agriculture and Department of Health.
Revised:  The mission will coordinate with the Philippine counterparts - the Department of Agriculture and Health.
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Original:  According to Philippines’ chief veterinary officer, Davinio P. Catbagan, six of 28 swine samples tested positive for Ebola-Reston by the U.S. Department of Agriculture laboratory.
Revised:  According to chief veterinary officer, Davinio P. Catbagan, six of 28 swine samples tested positive for Ebola-Reston by the U.S. Department of Agriculture laboratory.
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Original:  Both Ebola , and related Marburg hemorrhagic fever, are considered to infect humans via primates.
Revised:  Both Ebola and related Marburg hemorrhagic fever, are considered to infect humans via primates.
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Original:  The Straits Times reported that as of December, about 6,000 pigs at a farms in Pandi, Bulacan and in Talavera had tested positive for the Ebola-Reston virus.
Revised:  The Straits Times reported that as of December, about 6,000 pigs at Pandi, Bulacan and in Talavera had tested positive for the Ebola-Reston virus.
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Original:  The Straits Times reported that as of December, about 6,000 pigs at a farms in Pandi, Bulacan and in Talavera had tested positive for the Ebola-Reston virus.
Revised:  The Straits Times reported that as of December, about 6,000 pigs at a farms in Pandi, Bulacan and Talavera farms had tested positive for the Ebola-Reston virus.
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Original:  The U.N. mission is scheduled to visit for 10 days scientific tests,  two hog farms in Manaoag, Pangasinan and Pandi, Bulacan, and it would take months to report findings on the virus.
Revised:  The U.N. mission is scheduled to perform 10 days scientific tests, two hog farms in Manaoag, Pangasinan and Pandi, Bulacan, and it would take months to report findings on the virus.
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Original:  The U.N. mission is scheduled to visit for 10 days scientific tests,  two hog farms in Manaoag, Pangasinan and Pandi, Bulacan, and it would take months to report findings on the virus.
Revised:  The U.N. mission is scheduled to visit for 10 days scientific tests, on two hog farms in Manaoag, Pangasinan and Pandi, Bulacan, and it would take months to report findings on the virus.
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Original:  The U.N. mission is scheduled to visit for 10 days scientific tests,  two hog farms in Manaoag, Pangasinan and Pandi, Bulacan, and it would take months to report findings on the virus.
Revised:  The U.N. mission is scheduled to visit for 10 days scientific tests, two hog farms in Manaoag, Pangasinan and Pandi, Bulacan, but it would take months to report findings on the virus.
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Original:  In late October laboratory tests confirmed that pigs in Nueva Ecija and Bulacan hog farms were infected with the Ebola-Reston virus and the highly virulent strain of Porcine Reproductive and Respiratory Syndrome Virus (PRRS).
Revised:  In late October laboratory tests confirmed that pigs in Nueva Ecija and Bulacan farms were infected with the Ebola-Reston virus and the highly virulent strain of Porcine Reproductive and Respiratory Syndrome Virus (PRRS).
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Original:  PRRSV, or Blue-Ear Pig Disease (zhū láněr bìng 豬藍耳病), is a virus and economically important pandemic disease which causes reproductive failure in breeding stock and respiratory tract illness in young pigs.
Revised:  PRRSV, or Blue-Ear Pig Disease (zhū láněr bìng 豬藍耳病), is a viral and economically important pandemic disease which causes reproductive failure in breeding stock and respiratory tract illness in young pigs.
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Original:  Initially referred to as 'mystery swine disease' and 'mystery reproductive syndrome', it was first reported in 1987 in North America and Central Europe.
Revised:  Initially referred to as 'mystery swine disease' or 'mystery reproductive syndrome', it was first reported in 1987 in North America and Central Europe.
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Original:  In December, the Philippines health authorities conducted testing of about 10,000 swine in two northern Luzon quarantined farms.
Revised:  In December, the Philippine health authorities conducted testing of about 10,000 swine in two northern Luzon quarantined farms.
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Original:  There was  an outbreak of viral hemorrhagic fever among monkeys imported from the Philippines to Reston, Virginia.
Revised:  There was then, an outbreak of viral hemorrhagic fever among monkeys imported from the Philippines to Reston, Virginia.
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Original:  When the handler failed to become ill, it was concluded that the virus had a very low pathogenicity to humans  In January 1997, The Philippines Department of Environment and Natural Resources had ordered the immediate slaughter of some 600 monkeys in a Ferlite breeding farm in Laguna  to prevent an outbreak of the deadly Ebola Reston Strain virus.
Revised:  When the handler failed to become ill, it was concluded that the virus had a very low pathogenicity to humans . In January 1997, The Philippines Department of Environment and Natural Resources had ordered the immediate slaughter of some 600 monkeys in a Ferlite breeding farm in Laguna to prevent an outbreak of the deadly Ebola Reston Strain virus.
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Original:  When the handler failed to become ill, it was concluded that the virus had a very low pathogenicity to humans  In January 1997, The Philippines Department of Environment and Natural Resources had ordered the immediate slaughter of some 600 monkeys in a Ferlite breeding farm in Laguna  to prevent an outbreak of the deadly Ebola Reston Strain virus.
Revised:  When the handler failed to become ill, it was concluded that the virus had a very low pathogenicity to humans In January 1997, The Philippines Department of Environment and Natural Resources had ordered the immediate slaughter of some 600 monkeys in Ferlite, a breeding farm in Laguna to prevent an outbreak of the deadly Ebola Reston Strain virus.
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Original:  When the handler failed to become ill, it was concluded that the virus had a very low pathogenicity to humans  In January 1997, The Philippines Department of Environment and Natural Resources had ordered the immediate slaughter of some 600 monkeys in a Ferlite breeding farm in Laguna  to prevent an outbreak of the deadly Ebola Reston Strain virus.
Revised:  When the handler failed to become ill, it was concluded that the virus had a very low pathogenicity to humans In January 1997, The Philippines Department of Environment and Natural Resources had ordered the immediate slaughter of some 600 monkeys in a Ferlite breeding farm in Laguna , to prevent an outbreak of the deadly Ebola Reston Strain virus.
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Original:  When the handler failed to become ill, it was concluded that the virus had a very low pathogenicity to humans  In January 1997, The Philippines Department of Environment and Natural Resources had ordered the immediate slaughter of some 600 monkeys in a Ferlite breeding farm in Laguna  to prevent an outbreak of the deadly Ebola Reston Strain virus.
Revised:  When the handler failed to become ill, it was concluded that the virus had a very low pathogenicity to humans In January 1997, The Philippines Department of Environment and Natural Resources had ordered the immediate slaughter of some 600 monkeys in a Ferlite breeding farm in Laguna to prevent an outbreak of the deadly Ebola Reston strain virus.
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Original:  Meanwhile, the Philipine Department of Agriculture (DA) has directed the Bureau of Animal Industry (BAI) and the National Meat Inspection Commission (NMIC) to conduct swine tests in South Cotabato using the US test kits for the Ebola Reston virus, before approval of the "Meat in a Box" shipment to Singapore.
Revised:  The Philipines Department of Agriculture (DA) has directed the Bureau of Animal Industry (BAI) and the National Meat Inspection Commission (NMIC) to conduct swine tests in South Cotabato using the US test kits for the Ebola Reston virus, before approval of the "Meat in a Box" shipment to Singapore.
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Original:  The initial export of the meat for December , was deferred pending outcome of the ERV tests.
Revised:  The initial export of the meat for December was deferred pending outcome of the ERV tests.
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Original:  Meanwhile, in eight Barangays of Santa Maria, Davao del Sur, in Mindanao, the death of at least 50 pigs since December was caused by a mixture of viral and bacterial infection, according to Dr.
Revised:  Meanwhile, in eight Barangays of Santa Maria, Davao del Sur, in Mindanao, at least 50 pigs since December was caused by a mixture of viral and bacterial infection, according to Dr.
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Original:  Meanwhile, in eight Barangays of Santa Maria, Davao del Sur, in Mindanao, the death of at least 50 pigs since December was caused by a mixture of viral and bacterial infection, according to Dr.
Revised:  Meanwhile, in eight Barangays of Santa Maria, Davao del Sur, in Mindanao, the death of at least 50 pigs died since December due to viral and bacterial infection, according to Dr.
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Original:  Meanwhile, in eight Barangays of Santa Maria, Davao del Sur, in Mindanao, the death of at least 50 pigs since December was caused by a mixture of viral and bacterial infection, according to Dr.
Revised:  Meanwhile, in eight Barangays of Santa Maria, Davao del Sur, in Mindanao, the death of at least 50 pigs since December was caused by a mixture of viral and bacterial infections. Dr.
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