wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  It is believed that this is the first time within the country that a patient has been able to return to his residence in the aftermath of an operation of this nature .
Revised:  It is believed that this is the first time within the country that a patient has been able to return home with such an implant .
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Original:  The disease would have claimed his life had the plastic heart operation not occurred.
Revised:  The disease would have claimed his life had the operation to implant a plastic heart not occurred.
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Original:  Unlike other false hearts, Green's heart is powered by a pump that can be transported in a handheld bag
Revised:  Unlike other mechanical hearts, Green's heart is powered by a pump that can be transported in a handheld bag
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Original:  Unlike other mechanical hearts, Green's heart is powered by a pump that can be transported in a handheld bag . (Note: the patient has not yet tested either normal or TSA-style airport security by attempting to travel with said handheld bag, nor has he been advised to do so.
Revised:  Unlike other mechanical hearts, Green's heart is powered by a pump that can be transported in a handheld bag 
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Original:  United States President Barack Obama on Tuesday signed into law a bill that saw the US debt limit raised , averting a predicted default on the government's bills and economic remifications .
Revised:  United States President Barack Obama on Tuesday signed into law a bill that raised the US debt limit raised , averting a predicted default on the government's bills and economic remifications .
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Original:  United States President Barack Obama on Tuesday signed into law a bill that saw the US debt limit raised , averting a predicted default on the government's bills and economic remifications .
Revised:  United States President Barack Obama on Tuesday signed into law a bill that saw the US debt limit , averting a predicted default on the government's bills and economic remifications .
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Original:  United States President Barack Obama on Tuesday signed into law a bill that saw the US debt limit raised , averting a predicted default on the government's bills and economic remifications .
Revised:  United States President Barack Obama on Tuesday signed into law a bill that saw the US debt limit raised , averting a predicted default on the government's bills , among other economic ramifications .
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Original:  The bill in question was  announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
Revised:  The bill in question was the result of a deal announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
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Original:  The bill in question was  announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
Revised:  The bill in question was announced by Obama on Sunday . It was approved by the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
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Original:  The bill in question was  announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
Revised:  The bill in question was announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
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Original:  The bill in question was  announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
Revised:  The bill in question was announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 - 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
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Original:  The bill in question was  announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
Revised:  The bill in question was announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
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Original:  The bill in question was  announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
Revised:  The bill in question was announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
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Original:  The bill in question was  announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
Revised:  The bill in question was announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 - 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
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Original:  The bill in question was  announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 vote , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
Revised:  The bill in question was announced by Obama on Sunday , passed a vote in the House of Representatives on Monday night by a vote of 269 for and 161 against , passed the Senate early Tuesday afternoon by a 74 to 26 , and was subsequently signed by Obama.
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Original:  Under the terms of the bill, the debt limit can be raised from its previous level of 14.3 trillion by $900 billion, $ 400 billion of which can be immediately authorized by the President and the remainder of which is still subject to Congressional approval.
Revised:  Under the terms of the bill, the debt limit can be raised from its previous level of 14.3 trillion by $900 billion. $ 400 billion of which can be immediately authorized by the President and the remainder of which is still subject to Congressional approval.
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Original:  Under the terms of the bill, the debt limit can be raised from its previous level of 14.3 trillion by $900 billion, $ 400 billion of which can be immediately authorized by the President and the remainder of which is still subject to Congressional approval.
Revised:  Under the terms of the bill, the debt limit can be raised from its previous level of 14.3 trillion by $900 billion, $ 400 billion can be immediately authorized by the President and the remainder of which is still subject to Congressional approval.
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Original:  Under the terms of the bill, the debt limit can be raised from its previous level of 14.3 trillion by $900 billion, $ 400 billion of which can be immediately authorized by the President and the remainder of which is still subject to Congressional approval.
Revised:  Under the terms of the bill, the debt limit can be raised from its previous level of 14.3 trillion by $900 billion, $ 400 billion of which can be immediately authorized by the President , while the rest is still subject to Congressional approval.
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Original:  In conjunction with the increase, there will be an immediate budget cut of $917 billion, with total savings of at least $2.1 trillion over the next decade.
Revised:  Along with the increase, there will be an immediate budget cut of $917 billion, with total savings of at least $2.1 trillion over the next decade.
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Original:  In the longer term,  a special bipartisan committee of lawmakers from both the Senate and House is to be created to come up with proposals to reduce the federal budget deficit by at least  $1.5 trillion.
Revised:  In the longer term, a special bipartisan committee of lawmakers from both the Senate and House to come up with proposals to reduce the federal budget deficit by at least $1.5 trillion.
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Original:  In the longer term,  a special bipartisan committee of lawmakers from both the Senate and House is to be created to come up with proposals to reduce the federal budget deficit by at least  $1.5 trillion.
Revised:  In the longer term, a special bipartisan committee of lawmakers from both the Senate and House is to be created to come up with proposals to reduce the federal budget deficit by at least another $1.5 trillion.
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Original: The torch The olympic torch has a length of 77 cm (30 inches), with a maximum width of 10,5 cm (4.13 inches) and a weight of 1.9 kg (4.2 pounds).
Revised: The torch The olympic torch has a length of 77 cm (30 inches), and is 10,5 cm (4.13 inches) and a weight of 1.9 kg (4.2 pounds).
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Original:  It has been designed by Pininfarina and has a shape that remembers at the same time one ski and the Mole Antonelliana.
Revised:  It was designed by Pininfarina and has a shape that remembers at the same time one ski and the Mole Antonelliana.
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Original:  It has an external shell in aluminum alloy, while the functional inner part is in steel, copper and tecnopolymer .
Revised:  Its external shell is made of an aluminum alloy, while the functional inner part is in steel, copper and tecnopolymer .
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Original:  It has an external shell in aluminum alloy, while the functional inner part is in steel, copper and tecnopolymer .
Revised:  It has an external shell in aluminum alloy, while the functional inner part is in steel, copper and high-tech polymer .
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Original:  The outside has one resistant paint job to the high temperatures.
Revised:  The outside has a paint job resistant to high temperatures.
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Original:  The torch has an autonomy of 15 minutes and works to an altitude that goes from the sea level until 5'000 m (16,400 feet), with temperatures between -20°C and 25°C (-4 to 77 Fahrenheit).
Revised:  Each torch is designed to burn for 15 minutes and works to an altitude that goes from the sea level until 5'000 m (16,400 feet), with temperatures between -20°C and 25°C (-4 to 77 Fahrenheit).
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Original:  The torch has an autonomy of 15 minutes and works to an altitude that goes from the sea level until 5'000 m (16,400 feet), with temperatures between -20°C and 25°C (-4 to 77 Fahrenheit).
Revised:  The torch has an autonomy of 15 minutes , at altitudes from sea level to 5'000 m (16,400 feet), with temperatures between -20°C and 25°C (-4 to 77 Fahrenheit).
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Original:  The torch has an autonomy of 15 minutes and works to an altitude that goes from the sea level until 5'000 m (16,400 feet), with temperatures between -20°C and 25°C (-4 to 77 Fahrenheit).
Revised:  The torch has an autonomy of 15 minutes and works to an altitude that goes from the sea level until 5'000 m (16,400 feet), in temperatures between -20°C and 25°C (-4 to 77 Fahrenheit).
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Original:  The flame is fed from a hydrocarbon mixture ( 40\% propylene , 60\% butane ) contained in an aluminum cylinder  .
Revised:  The flame is fed from a mixture of 40\% propylene , 60\% butane ) contained in an aluminum cylinder .
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Original:  The flame is fed from a hydrocarbon mixture ( 40\% propylene , 60\% butane ) contained in an aluminum cylinder  .
Revised:  The flame is fed from a hydrocarbon mixture ( 40\% propylene and 60\% butane ) contained in an aluminum cylinder .
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Original:  The flame is fed from a hydrocarbon mixture ( 40\% propylene , 60\% butane ) contained in an aluminum cylinder  .
Revised:  The flame is fed from a hydrocarbon mixture ( 40\% propylene , 60\% butane , which is contained in an aluminum cylinder .
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Original:  The torch will travel all the Italy transported by more than 10'000 carriers and it will arrive in Turin the February 9, 2006, where the Winter Olimpics will be inaugurated, after 11'000 Km (6,835 miles) of travel.
Revised:  The torch will travel acrossItaly transported by more than 10'000 carriers and it will arrive in Turin the February 9, 2006, where the Winter Olimpics will be inaugurated, after 11'000 Km (6,835 miles) of travel.
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Original:  The torch will travel all the Italy transported by more than 10'000 carriers and it will arrive in Turin the February 9, 2006, where the Winter Olimpics will be inaugurated, after 11'000 Km (6,835 miles) of travel.
Revised:  The torch will travel all the Italy transported by more than 10'000 carriers and it will arrive in Turin on February 9, 2006, where the Winter Olimpics will be inaugurated, after 11'000 Km (6,835 miles) of travel.
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Original:  The November 27 the flame was burned on the altar of Hestia in Olympia, in Greece, and delivered to the first torch carrier, the pole vaulter Kostas Fidippidis.
Revised:  On November 27 the flame was burned on the altar of Hestia in Olympia, in Greece, and delivered to the first torch carrier, the pole vaulter Kostas Fidippidis.
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Original:  The November 27 the flame was burned on the altar of Hestia in Olympia, in Greece, and delivered to the first torch carrier, the pole vaulter Kostas Fidippidis.
Revised:  The November 27 the flame was burned on the altar of Hestia in Olympia, in Greece, and delivered to the first torch carrier, pole vaulter Kostas Fidippidis.
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Original:  The torch will travel across Italy transported by more than 10'000 carriers and it will arrive in Turin on February 9, 2006, where the Winter Olimpics will be inaugurated, after 11'000 Km (6,835 miles) of travel.
Revised:  The torch will travel across Italy transported by more than 10'000 carriers and it will arrive in Turin on February 9, 2006, where the Winter Olympics will be inaugurated, after 11'000 Km (6,835 miles) of travel.
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Original: Kapitsa , who was born to Physic Nobel Prize laureate in , England , graduated from the 's Faculty of Geography in 1953.
Revised: Kapitsa was born to Physic Nobel Prize laureate in , England , graduated from the 's Faculty of Geography in 1953.
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Original:  Kapitsa's body will lie-in state on August 4 in the foyer of the Moscow State University’s Community Centre
Revised:  Kapitsa's body will lie in state on August 4 in the foyer of the Moscow State University’s Community Centre
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Original:  Kapitsa is most recognised for his part in the discovery of in Antarctica.
Revised:  He is best known for his part in the discovery of in Antarctica.
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Original: 250px|Satellite image of Lake Vostok , the Russian geographer best known for his part in the discovery of in Antarctica has died  at the age of 80 in Moscow.
Revised: 250px|Satellite image of Lake Vostok , the Russian geographer best known for his part in the discovery of in Antarctica has died in Moscow at the age of 80 in Moscow.
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Original: 250px|Satellite image of Lake Vostok , the Russian geographer best known for his part in the discovery of in Antarctica has died  at the age of 80 in Moscow.
Revised: 250px|Satellite image of Lake Vostok , the Russian geographer best known for his part in the discovery of in Antarctica has died at the age of 80.
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Original:  Kapitsa was born to Physic Nobel Prize laureate in , England in 1931.
Revised:  Kapitsa was born to Physics laureate in , England in 1931.
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Original:  In 1967 he lead the on a two year expedition through eastern Africa.
Revised:  In 1967 , he led the on a two year expedition through eastern Africa.
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Original:  Lake Vostok, named after the , lies four kilometres below the ice and is around 15.5 thousand km².
Revised:  Lake Vostok, named after the , lies four kilometers below the ice and is around 15.5 thousand km².
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Original:  It is believed that the lake is home to ancient organisms  which have evolved over time.
Revised:  It is believed that the lake is home to ancient organisms , which have evolved over time.
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Original: 250px|Satellite image of Lake Vostok , the Russian geographer best known for his part in the discovery of in Antarctica, has died in Moscow at the age of 80.
Revised: 250px|Satellite image of Lake Vostok , the geographer best known for his part in the discovery of in Antarctica, has died in Moscow at the age of 80.
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Original:  He participated in four Soviet expeditions to the during his career.
Revised:  He participated in four expeditions to the during his career.
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Original:  Lake Vostok, named after the , lies four kilometers below the ice and is around 15.5 thousand km².
Revised:  Lake Vostok, named after the , lies four kilometres below the ice and is around 15.5 thousand km².
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Original:  a dog deemed dangerous must be registered with the state on the Virginia Dangerous Dog Registry (published by the state to the web) and owners must carry insurance liability protection for the animal up to $300,000 dangerous dogs cannot be sold, adopted or tranferred , except to animal control no dog deemed dangerous can be transferred into the state The dog would be legally defined as dangerous if  has bitten or attacked a person or companion animal.
Revised:  a dog deemed dangerous must be registered with the state on the Virginia Dangerous Dog Registry (published by the state to the web) and owners must carry insurance liability protection for the animal up to $300,000 dangerous dogs cannot be sold, adopted or tranferred , except to animal control no dog deemed dangerous can be transferred into the state The dog would be legally defined as dangerous if it has bitten or attacked a person or companion animal.
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Original:  In the case of an attack on a companion animal, the injuries required it be euthanized.
Revised:  In the case of an attack on a companion animal, the injuries to the animal are such that it had to be euthanized.
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Original:  The state penal code currently contains no guidelines in the case of injury or death due to a dog attack.
Revised:  The state penal code contains no guidelines in the case of injury or death due to a dog attack.
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Original:  The aircraft attempted the landing at approximately 7:15 p.m. local time under heavy snow, and skid off the runway, crashing through a steel barrier surrounding the airport and on to a residential street.
Revised:  The aircraft attempted the landing at approximately 7:15 p.m. local time under heavy snow, and skidded off the runway, crashing through a steel barrier surrounding the airport and on to a residential street.
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Original:  There were 98 passengers on the flight, two of them were reportedly injured and taken to a local hospital and the rest were bused to the airport terminal.
Revised:  There were 98 passengers on the flight, two of them were reportedly injured and taken to a local hospital and the rest were bussed to the airport terminal.
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Original:  This was followed by stall warnings, which the interim BEA report say were ignored by pilots during a three-and-a-half minute fall of 38,000 feet into the ocean    [ 
Revised:  This was followed by stall warnings, which the interim BEA report say were ignored by pilots during a three-and-a-half minute fall of 38,000 feet into the ocean . [ 
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Original:  This was followed by stall warnings, which the interim BEA report say were ignored by pilots during a three-and-a-half minute fall of 38,000 feet into the ocean    [ 
Revised:  This was followed by stall warnings, which the interim BEA report say were ignored by pilots during a three-and-a-half minute fall of 38,000 feet into the ocean [and 
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Original:   We now have confirmation that the affirmations coming from the BEA were not only premature, (but) lacking any objectivity, partial and very oriented towards the defence of Airbus."
Revised:  " We now have confirmation that the affirmations coming from the BEA were not only premature, (but) lacking any objectivity, partial and very oriented towards the defence of Airbus."
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Original: Junior Transport Minister Thierry Mariani defended the BEA.
Revised: Junior Transport Minister defended the BEA.
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Original:  Recent tensions between Iran and Israel over the nuclear activities in Tehran  have increased as a result of Abmadinejad 's comment.
Revised:  Recent tensions between Iran and Israel over the nuclear activities in Tehran have increased as a result of Ahmadinejad 's comment.
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Original:  "It's all the more reason why it's so important that the regime not have the ability to develop nuclear weapons.    
Revised:  "It's all the more reason why it's so important that the regime not have the ability to develop nuclear weapons. " 
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Original:  Such evil remarks in blatant  disregard of documented history is nothing new of course coming from the kind of people that Mr. Ahmadinejad represents.
Revised:  Such evil remarks in blatant sic disregard of documented history is nothing new of course coming from the kind of people that Mr. Ahmadinejad represents.
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Original: During her appearance on the Tonight Show'', Barr insisted that she was serious about the run and revealed that she had created her own political party, which she identified as the Green Tea Party.
Revised: During her appearance on the Tonight Show'', Barr insisted that she was serious about the run and revealed that she had created her own political party, which she called the Green Tea Party.
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Original: During her appearance on the Tonight Show'', Barr insisted that she was serious about the run and revealed that she had created her own political party, which she called the  Green Tea Party  .
Revised: During her appearance on the Tonight Show'', Barr insisted that she was serious about the run and revealed that she had created her own political party, which she called the " Green Tea Party .
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Original: During her appearance on the Tonight Show'', Barr insisted that she was serious about the run and revealed that she had created her own political party, which she called the  Green Tea Party  .
Revised: During her appearance on the Tonight Show'', Barr insisted that she was serious about the run and revealed that she had created her own political party, which she called the Green Tea Party " .
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Original:  She proclaimed that the taxpayers would be her and that her first order of business would be the legalization of  
Revised:  She proclaimed that the taxpayers would be her and that her first order of business would be the legalization of . 
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