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Original:  The Mummy of San Andrés is a human mummy belonging to the Guanche culture ( ancient inhabitants of the Canary Islands, Spain ) . One of the best preserved Guanche mummies, for this is one of the few Guanche mummies to have a proper name : Mummy of San Andrés , which refers to the place where he was discovered, in a manner similar to what happens with the mummies of the swamps of northern Europe : Lindow Man, Grauballe Man and Tollund Man, among others .
Revised:  The Mummy of San Andrés is a human mummy belonging to the Guanche culture ( ancient inhabitants of the Canary Islands, Spain ) . One of the best preserved Guanche mummies, for this is one of the few Guanche mummies to have a proper name : Mummy of San Andrés . The appellation refers to the place where he was discovered, in a manner similar to what happens with the mummies of the swamps of northern Europe : Lindow Man, Grauballe Man and Tollund Man, among others .
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Original:  The Mummy of San Andrés is a human mummy belonging to the Guanche culture ( ancient inhabitants of the Canary Islands, Spain ) . One of the best preserved Guanche mummies, for this is one of the few Guanche mummies to have a proper name : Mummy of San Andrés , which refers to the place where he was discovered, in a manner similar to what happens with the mummies of the swamps of northern Europe : Lindow Man, Grauballe Man and Tollund Man, among others .
Revised:  The Mummy of San Andrés is a human mummy belonging to the Guanche culture ( ancient inhabitants of the Canary Islands, Spain ) . One of the best preserved Guanche mummies, for this is one of the few Guanche mummies to have a proper name : Mummy of San Andrés , which refers to the place where the male specimen was discovered, in a manner similar to what happens with the mummies of the swamps of northern Europe : Lindow Man, Grauballe Man and Tollund Man, among others .
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Original:  The Mummy of San Andrés is a human mummy belonging to the Guanche culture ( ancient inhabitants of the Canary Islands, Spain ) . One of the best preserved Guanche mummies, for this is one of the few Guanche mummies to have a proper name : Mummy of San Andrés , which refers to the place where he was discovered, in a manner similar to what happens with the mummies of the swamps of northern Europe : Lindow Man, Grauballe Man and Tollund Man, among others .
Revised:  The Mummy of San Andrés is a human mummy belonging to the Guanche culture ( ancient inhabitants of the Canary Islands, Spain ) . One of the best preserved Guanche mummies, for this is one of the few Guanche mummies to have a proper name : Mummy of San Andrés , which refers to the place where he was discovered, similar to how the mummies of the swamps of northern Europe : Lindow Man, Grauballe Man and Tollund Man, among others .
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Original:  The Mummy of San Andrés is a human mummy belonging to the Guanche culture ( ancient inhabitants of the Canary Islands, Spain ) . One of the best preserved Guanche mummies, for this is one of the few Guanche mummies to have a proper name : Mummy of San Andrés , which refers to the place where he was discovered, in a manner similar to what happens with the mummies of the swamps of northern Europe : Lindow Man, Grauballe Man and Tollund Man, among others .
Revised:  The Mummy of San Andrés is a human mummy belonging to the Guanche culture ( ancient inhabitants of the Canary Islands, Spain ) . One of the best preserved Guanche mummies, for this is one of the few Guanche mummies to have a proper name : Mummy of San Andrés , which refers to the place where he was discovered, in a manner similar to what happens with the mummies of the swamps of northern Europe : Lindow Man, Grauballe Man and Tollund Man, among others 
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Original:  The mummy was found in a cave in a ravine outside the village of San Andrés.
Revised:  It was found in a cave in a ravine outside the village of San Andrés.
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Original:  Interesting facts: Found on a wooden board (now this plate not displayed to the public) .
Revised:  Interesting facts: Found on a wooden board (now this plate not displayed to the public) 
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Original:  References The mystery of the guanche mummies (in Spanish
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Original:  No one knows with certainty the exact year of its discovery, only that the mummywas exhibited at the Museo Municipal of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, until, in 1958, became part of the collections of the Museum of Nature and Man (Museo de la Naturaleza y el Hombre) of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, where it currently is.
Revised:  The exact year of its discovery, only that the mummywas exhibited at the Museo Municipal of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, until, in 1958, became part of the collections of the Museum of Nature and Man (Museo de la Naturaleza y el Hombre) of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, where it currently is.
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Original:  No one knows with certainty the exact year of its discovery, only that the mummywas exhibited at the Museo Municipal of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, until, in 1958, became part of the collections of the Museum of Nature and Man (Museo de la Naturaleza y el Hombre) of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, where it currently is.
Revised:  No one knows with certainty the exact year of the mummy's discovery is unknown. The specimen was kept at the Museo Municipal of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, until, in 1958, became part of the collections of the Museum of Nature and Man (Museo de la Naturaleza y el Hombre) of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, where it currently is.
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Original:  The specimen was kept at the Museo Municipal of Santa Cruz de Tenerife , until , in 1958,  became part of the collections of the Museum of Nature and Man (Museo de la Naturaleza y el Hombre) of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, where it currently is.
Revised:  The specimen was kept at the Museo Municipal of Santa Cruz de Tenerife until 1958, became part of the collections of the Museum of Nature and Man (Museo de la Naturaleza y el Hombre) of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, where it currently is.
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Original: In    1995, Jennings helped organize an exhibit titled "Four Generations: Mopope, Palmer, Jennings, and Morgan" at the Red Earth Indian Center in Oklahoma City.
Revised: In In 1995, Jennings helped organize an exhibit titled "Four Generations: Mopope, Palmer, Jennings, and Morgan" at the Red Earth Indian Center in Oklahoma City.
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Original: Vanessa Paukeigope (Santos ) (Morgan) Jennings (born October 5, 1952) is a Kiowa-Kiowa Apache-Gila River Pima regalia maker, clothing designer, cradleboard maker, and bead artist from Oklahoma.
Revised: Vanessa Paukeigope Santos Jennings (born October 5, 1952) is a Kiowa-Kiowa Apache-Gila River Pima regalia maker, clothing designer, cradleboard maker, and bead artist from Oklahoma.
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Original: Vanessa Paukeigope (Santos ) (Morgan) Jennings (born October 5, 1952) is a Kiowa-Kiowa Apache-Gila River Pima regalia maker, clothing designer, cradleboard maker, and bead artist from Oklahoma.
Revised: Vanessa Paukeigope (Santos ) (Morgan) Jennings (born October 5, 1952) is a Kiowa/Kiowa Apache/Gila River Pima regalia maker, clothing designer, cradleboard maker, and bead artist from Oklahoma.
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Original: Vanessa Paukeigope (Santos ) (Morgan) Jennings (born October 5, 1952) is a Kiowa-Kiowa Apache-Gila River Pima regalia maker, clothing designer, cradleboard maker, and bead artist from Oklahoma.
Revised: Vanessa Paukeigope (Santos ) (Morgan) Jennings (born October 5, 1952) is a Kiowa-Kiowa Apache-Gila River Pima regalia maker, clothing designer, cradleboard maker, and beadwork artist from Oklahoma.
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Original:  To this end, a succession of small British military expeditions landed in Senegal and captured Fort Saint Louis the French slave fort located at Saint-Louis and  Gorée, seizing French vessels and supplies.
Revised:  To this end, a succession of small British military expeditions landed in Senegal and captured Fort Saint Louis the French slave fort located at Saint-Louis and that of Gorée, seizing French vessels and supplies.
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Original:  It is also the first and currently only instance where a B-type star, 42 Orionis is responsible for the photoevaporation.
Revised:  It was also the first and currently only instance where a B-type star, 42 Orionis is responsible for the photoevaporation.
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Original:  It is also the first and currently only instance where a B-type star, 42 Orionis is responsible for the photoevaporation.
Revised:  It is also the first instance where a B-type star, 42 Orionis is responsible for the photoevaporation.
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Original:  To date, the solar system , with 8 planets, 5 dwarf planets and 5 planetesimal systems, is the largest planetary system found.
Revised:  To date, the Solar System , with 8 planets, 5 dwarf planets and 5 planetesimal systems, is the largest planetary system found.
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Original: Photosynthesis is a process used by plants and other organisms to convert light energy into chemical energy that, through cellular respiration, can later be released to fuel the organism's metabolic activities.
Revised: Photosynthesis is a process used by plants and other organisms to convert light energy into chemical energy that, through cellular respiration, can later be released to fuel the organism's activities.
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Original:  Eugene Rabinowitch (1945) Photosynthesis and Related Processes via Biodiversity Heritage Library
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Original:  Cereals only are estimated to bind 3825 Tg (tera grams) of carbon dioxide every year, ie. 3.825 billion tons. cite journal |last1=Frankelius |first1=Per |title=A proposal to rethink agriculture in the climate calculations |journal=Agronomy Journal |date=July/August |volume=112 |issue=4 |pages=3216-3221 |doi=doi.org/10.1002/agj2.20286 URL
Revised:  Cereals only are estimated to bind 3825 Tg (tera grams) of carbon dioxide every year, ie. 3.825 billion tons. 
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Original:  Cereals only are estimated to bind 3825 Tg (tera grams) of carbon dioxide every year, ie . 3.825 billion tons.
Revised:  Cereals only are estimated to bind 3825 Tg (tera grams) of carbon dioxide every year, i.e . 3.825 billion tons.
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Original: The photosynthesis is vital for climate processes, as it captures carbon dioxide from the air and then binds carbon in plants and further in soils and harvested products.
Revised: Photosynthesis is vital for climate processes, as it captures carbon dioxide from the air and then binds carbon in plants and further in soils and harvested products.
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Original:  This chemical energy is stored in carbohydrate molecules, such as sugars and starches, which are synthesized from carbon dioxide and water – hence the name photosynthesis, from the Greek phōs (), "light", and sunthesis (), "putting together".
Revised:  Some of this chemical energy is stored in carbohydrate molecules, such as sugars and starches, which are synthesized from carbon dioxide and water – hence the name photosynthesis, from the Greek phōs (), "light", and sunthesis (), "putting together".
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Original:  In plants, algae and cyanobacteria, long-term energy storage in the form of sugars is produced by a subsequent sequence of reactions called the Calvin cycle.
Revised:  In plants, algae and cyanobacteria, sugars are synthesized by a subsequent sequence of reactions called the Calvin cycle.
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Original:  The phenomenon that plants receive some energy from light – in addition to air, soil, and water – was first discovered in 1779 by Jan Ingenhousz.
Revised:  That plants receive some energy from light – in addition to air, soil, and water – was first discovered in 1779 by Jan Ingenhousz.
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Original:  Cereals only are estimated to bind 3825 Tg ( tera grams ) of carbon dioxide every year, i.e. 3.825 billion tons.
Revised:  Cereals only are estimated to bind 3825 Tg ( teragrams ) of carbon dioxide every year, i.e. 3.825 billion tons.
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Original:  Photosynthetic organisms are photoautotrophs, which means that they are able to synthesize food directly from carbon dioxide and water using energy from light.
Revised:  Most photosynthetic organisms are photoautotrophs, which means that they are able to synthesize food directly from carbon dioxide and water using energy from light.
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Original:  This is called oxygenic photosynthesis and is by far the most common type of photosynthesis used by living organisms.
Revised:  This oxygenic photosynthesis is by far the most common type of photosynthesis used by living organisms.
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Original:  There are also many varieties of anoxygenic photosynthesis, used mostly by certain types of bacteria, which consume carbon dioxide but do not release oxygen.
Revised:  There are also many varieties of anoxygenic photosynthesis, used mostly by bacteria, which consume carbon dioxide but do not release oxygen.
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Original:  The general equation for photosynthesis as first proposed by Cornelis van Niel is therefore : + + → + + Photosynthesis occurs in two stages.
Revised:  The general equation for photosynthesis as first proposed by Cornelis van Niel is : + + → + + Photosynthesis occurs in two stages.
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Original:  In the first stage, light-dependent reactions or light reactions capture the energy of light and use it to make the  energy-storage molecules ATPand NADPH . During the second stage, the light-independent reactions use these products to capture and reduce carbon dioxide. upright=1.4|Light-dependent reactions of photosynthesis at the thylakoid membrane In the light-dependent reactions, one molecule of the pigment chlorophyll absorbs one photon and loses one electron.
Revised:  In the first stage, light-dependent reactions or light reactions capture the energy of light and use it to make the energy-storage molecule ATP . During the second stage, the light-independent reactions use these products to capture and reduce carbon dioxide. upright=1.4|Light-dependent reactions of photosynthesis at the thylakoid membrane In the light-dependent reactions, one molecule of the pigment chlorophyll absorbs one photon and loses one electron.
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Original:  This electron is passed to a modified form of chlorophyll called pheophytin, which passes the electron to a quinone molecule, starting the flow of electrons down an electron transport chain that leads to the ultimate reduction of NADP to NADPH.
Revised:  This electron is taken up by a modified form of chlorophyll called pheophytin, which passes the electron to a quinone molecule, starting the flow of electrons down an electron transport chain that leads to the ultimate reduction of NADP to NADPH.
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Original:  The absorption of a photon by the antenna complex frees an electron by a process called photoinduced charge separation.
Revised:  The absorption of a photon by the antenna complex loosens an electron by a process called photoinduced charge separation.
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Original:  That freed electron is transferred to the primary electron-acceptor molecule, pheophytin.
Revised:  That loosened electron is taken up by the primary electron-acceptor molecule, pheophytin.
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Original:  As the electrons are shuttled through an electron transport chain (the so-called Z-scheme shown in the diagram), it initially functions to generate a chemiosmotic potential  by pumping proton cations (H+) across the membrane and into the thylakoid space.
Revised:  As the electrons are shuttled through an electron transport chain (the so-called Z-scheme shown in the diagram), a chemiosmotic potential by pumping proton cations (H+) across the membrane and into the thylakoid space.
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Original:  As the electrons are shuttled through an electron transport chain (the so-called Z-scheme shown in the diagram), it initially functions to generate a chemiosmotic potential  by pumping proton cations (H+) across the membrane and into the thylakoid space.
Revised:  As the electrons are shuttled through an electron transport chain (the so-called Z-scheme shown in the diagram), it initially functions to generate a chemiosmotic potential is generated by pumping proton cations (H+) across the membrane and into the thylakoid space.
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Original:  Two water molecules are oxidized by  four successive charge-separation reactions by photosystem II to yield a molecule of diatomic oxygen and four hydrogen ions.
Revised:  Two water molecules are oxidized by four successive charge-separation reactions of photosystem II to yield a molecule of diatomic oxygen and four hydrogen ions.
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Original:  The electrons yielded are transferred to a redox-active tyrosine residue that then reduces the oxidized P680.
Revised:  The electrons yielded are transferred to a redox-active tyrosine residue that is oxidized by the energy of P680.
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Original:  Photosystem II is the only known biological enzyme that carries out this oxidation of water.
Revised:  Photosystem II is the only known biological enzyme that carries out the oxidation of water.
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Original:  In the light-independent (or "dark") reactions, the enzyme RuBisCO captures CO2 from the atmosphere and, in a process called the Calvin cycle, it uses the newly formed NADPH and releases three-carbon sugars, which are later combined to form sucrose and starch.
Revised:  In the light-independent (or "dark") reactions, the enzyme RuBisCO captures CO2 from the atmosphere and, in a process called the Calvin cycle, uses the newly formed NADPH and releases three-carbon sugars, which are later combined to form sucrose and starch.
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Original: 4|Overview of the Calvin cycle and carbon fixation Carbon fixation produces the intermediate three-carbon sugar product , which is then converted into the final carbohydrate products.
Revised: 4|Overview of the Calvin cycle and carbon fixation Carbon fixation produces the three-carbon sugar product , which is then converted into the final carbohydrate products.
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Original: 4|Overview of the Calvin cycle and carbon fixation Carbon fixation produces the intermediate three-carbon sugar product , which is then converted into the final carbohydrate products.
Revised: 4|Overview of the Calvin cycle and carbon fixation Carbon fixation produces the intermediate three-carbon sugar intermediate , which is then converted into the final carbohydrate products.
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Original:  The simple carbon sugars produced by photosynthesis are then used in the forming of other organic compounds, such as the building material cellulose, the precursors for lipid and amino acid biosynthesis, or as a fuel in cellular respiration.
Revised:  The simple carbon sugars produced by photosynthesis are then used to form other organic compounds, such as the building material cellulose, the precursors for lipid and amino acid biosynthesis, or as a fuel in cellular respiration.
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Original:  Most (5 out of 6 molecules) of the glyceraldehyde 3-phosphate produced is used to regenerate ribulose 1,5-bisphosphate so the process can continue.
Revised:  Most (5 out of 6 molecules) of the glyceraldehyde 3-phosphate produced are used to regenerate ribulose 1,5-bisphosphate so the process can continue.
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Original:  Sixteen thousand species of plants use CAM . Calcium oxalate accumulating plants, such as Amaranthus hybridus and Colobanthus quitensis, showed a variation of photosynthesis where calcium oxalate crystals function as dynamic carbon pools, supplying carbon dioxide (CO2) to photosynthetic cells when stomata are partially or totally closed.
Revised:  CAM is used by 16,000 species of plants use CAM . Calcium oxalate accumulating plants, such as Amaranthus hybridus and Colobanthus quitensis, showed a variation of photosynthesis where calcium oxalate crystals function as dynamic carbon pools, supplying carbon dioxide (CO2) to photosynthetic cells when stomata are partially or totally closed.
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Original:  Sixteen thousand species of plants use CAM . Calcium oxalate accumulating plants, such as Amaranthus hybridus and Colobanthus quitensis, showed a variation of photosynthesis where calcium oxalate crystals function as dynamic carbon pools, supplying carbon dioxide (CO2) to photosynthetic cells when stomata are partially or totally closed.
Revised:  Sixteen thousand species of plants . Calcium oxalate accumulating plants, such as Amaranthus hybridus and Colobanthus quitensis, showed a variation of photosynthesis where calcium oxalate crystals function as dynamic carbon pools, supplying carbon dioxide (CO2) to photosynthetic cells when stomata are partially or totally closed.
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Original:  Sixteen thousand species of plants use CAM . Calcium oxalate accumulating plants, such as Amaranthus hybridus and Colobanthus quitensis, showed a variation of photosynthesis where calcium oxalate crystals function as dynamic carbon pools, supplying carbon dioxide (CO2) to photosynthetic cells when stomata are partially or totally closed.
Revised:  Sixteen thousand species of plants use CAM . Calcium oxalate accumulating plants, such as Amaranthus hybridus and Colobanthus quitensis, show a variation of photosynthesis where calcium oxalate crystals function as dynamic carbon pools, supplying carbon dioxide (CO2) to photosynthetic cells when stomata are partially or totally closed.
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Original:  Alarm photosynthesis represents an unknown photosynthetic variation to be added to the already known C4 and CAM pathways.
Revised:  Alarm photosynthesis represents a photosynthetic variant to be added to the already known C4 and CAM pathways.
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Original:  Alarm photosynthesis represents an unknown photosynthetic variation to be added to the already known C4 and CAM pathways.
Revised:  Alarm photosynthesis represents an unknown photosynthetic variation to be added to the well-known C4 and CAM pathways.
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Original:  An enzyme, carbonic anhydrase, located within the carboxysome releases CO2 from the dissolved hydrocarbonate ions (HCO).
Revised:  An enzyme, carbonic anhydrase, located within the carboxysome releases CO2 from dissolved hydrocarbonate ions (HCO).
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Original:  Scientists are studying photosynthesis in hopes of developing plants with yield increases . Chlorophyll fluorescence of photosystem II can measure the light reaction, and Infrared gas analyzers can measure the dark reaction.
Revised:  Scientists are studying photosynthesis in hopes of developing plants with increased yield . Chlorophyll fluorescence of photosystem II can measure the light reaction, and Infrared gas analyzers can measure the dark reaction.
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Original:  Scientists are studying photosynthesis in hopes of developing plants with yield increases . Chlorophyll fluorescence of photosystem II can measure the light reaction, and Infrared gas analyzers can measure the dark reaction.
Revised:  Scientists are studying photosynthesis in hopes of developing plants with yield increases . Chlorophyll fluorescence of photosystem II can measure the light reaction, and infrared gas analyzers can measure the dark reaction.
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Original:  However, it is more common to used chlorophyll fluorescence for plant stress measurement, where appropriate, because the most commonly used measuring parameters FV/FM and Y(II) or F/FM' can be made in a few seconds, allowing the measurement of larger plant populations.
Revised:  However, it is more common to used chlorophyll fluorescence for plant stress measurement, where appropriate, because the most commonly used parameters FV/FM and Y(II) or F/FM' can be made in a few seconds, allowing the measurement of larger plant populations.
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