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Original:  Wilco Van Rooijen, one of the two rescued Dutch climbers, spoke to the Associated Press via phone.
Revised:  Wilco Van Rooijen, one of the two rescued Dutch climbers, spoke to AP via phone.
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Original:  He told the Associated Press that a low-cloud bank caused whiteout on the mountain, but he chose to begin his decent from the area near the summit.
Revised:  He told AP that a low-cloud bank caused whiteout on the mountain, but he chose to begin his decent from the area near the summit.
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Original:  "There was a Korean guy hanging upside down," Van Rooijen told the Associated Press . "There was a second Korean guy who held him with a rope but he was also in shock and then a third guy was there also, and they were trying to survive but I had also to survive."
Revised:  "There was a Korean guy hanging upside down," Van Rooijen told AP . "There was a second Korean guy who held him with a rope but he was also in shock and then a third guy was there also, and they were trying to survive but I had also to survive."
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Original: The Associated Press (AP) and CNN reported about midday UTC that the death toll in the Sunday's accident on K2 has risen to 11. 2 Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter, AP also said.
Revised: The Associated Press (AP) and CNN reported about midday UTC that the death toll in the Sunday's accident on K2 has risen to eleven. 2 Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter, AP also said.
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Original: The Associated Press (AP) and CNN reported about midday UTC that the death toll in the Sunday's accident on K2 has risen to 11. 2 Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter, AP also said.
Revised: The Associated Press (AP) and CNN reported about midday UTC that the death toll in the Sunday's accident on K2 has risen to 11. Two Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter, AP also said.
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Original:  66 people — not counting those in the latest incident — have died on the mountain  then.
Revised:  66 people — not counting those in the latest incident — have died on the mountain since then.
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Original: Two Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter,  AP also said.
Revised: Two Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter, the AP also said.
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Original: A helicopter rescue for had to Confortola due to poor weather.
Revised: A helicopter rescue for Confortola had to be delayed due to poor weather.
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Original:  CNN reports the groups was climbing in two teams and both were descending from the summit it near the summit when an a large chuck of ice fell sweeping three people off the mountain.
Revised:  CNN reports the group was climbing in two teams and both were descending from the summit it near the summit when an a large chuck of ice fell sweeping three people off the mountain.
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Original:  CNN reports the group was climbing in two teams and both were descending from the summit it near the summit when an a large chuck of ice fell sweeping three people off the mountain.
Revised:  CNN reports the group was climbing in two teams and both were descending from near the summit when an a large chuck of ice fell sweeping three people off the mountain.
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Original:  K2 The ice triggered an avalanche with caused confusion withing the party.
Revised:  K2 The ice triggered an avalanche which caused confusion within the party.
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Original:  "Everything was going well to Camp Four  and on summit attempt  everything went wrong," Van Rooijen said.
Revised:  "Everything was going well to Camp Four , and on summit attempt everything went wrong," Van Rooijen said.
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Original:  "Everything was going well to Camp Four  and on summit attempt  everything went wrong," Van Rooijen said.
Revised:  "Everything was going well to Camp Four and on summit attempt , everything went wrong," Van Rooijen said.
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Original:  Both the Times and the Associated Press report that the pneumonia is not related to the inflammatory lung disease Mac has, which has been in remission since 2005 
Revised:  Both the Times and the Associated Press report that the pneumonia is not related to the inflammatory lung disease Mac has, which has been in remission since 2005. 
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Original:  Both the Times and the Associated Press report that the pneumonia is not related to the inflammatory lung disease Mac has, which has been in remission since 2005.
Revised:  The report said that the pneumonia is not related to the inflammatory lung disease Mac has, which has been in remission since 2005.
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Original: The Associated Press reported Sunday that American comedian Bernie Mac is responding well to treatment for pneumonia in a Chicago, Illinois hospital.
Revised: The Associated Press reported Sunday that American comedian is responding well to treatment for pneumonia in a Chicago, Illinois hospital.
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Original:  Bernie Mac's representative told People that Internet rumors of critical illness and even death are untrue.
Revised:  Bernie Mac's representative told that Internet rumors of critical illness and even death are untrue.
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Original:  "Bernie Mac is still alive and being treated in a Chicago hospital for pneumonia and is expected to make a full recovery," said Danica Smith
Revised:  "Bernie Mac is still alive and being treated in a Chicago hospital for and is expected to make a full recovery," said Danica Smith
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Original:  The vitamin, also known as ascorbate, causes high amounts of hydrogen peroxide in the body, which kills cancer cells.
Revised:  The vitamin, also known as ascorbate, caused high amounts of hydrogen peroxide in the body, which kills cancer cells.
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Original:  The vitamin, also known as ascorbate, causes high amounts of hydrogen peroxide in the body, which kills cancer cells.
Revised:  The vitamin, also known as ascorbate, causes high amounts of hydrogen peroxide in the body, which killed cancer cells.
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Original:   Treating cancer with vitamin C was considered in the 1970s by American scientist Linus Pauling, who won the chemistry Nobel Prize in 1954.
Revised:  Linus Pauling in 1954 Treating cancer with vitamin C was considered in the 1970s by American scientist Linus Pauling, who won the chemistry Nobel Prize in 1954.
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Original: Researchers from the National Institutes of Health injected doses of vitamin C into four grams per kilo of body weight into mice with pancreatic, brain and ovarian cancers, which started a destructive chain reaction with the cancer cells.
Revised: Researchers from the National Institutes of Health injected doses of vitamin C of four grams per kilo of body weight into mice with pancreatic, brain and ovarian cancers, which started a destructive chain reaction with the cancer cells.
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Original: A diagram of Vitamin C Vitamin C can help cut the spread of cancer and tumours by half, according to US researchers who tested on mice.
Revised: A diagram of Vitamin C Vitamin C can help cut the spread of cancer and tumours by half, according to United States researchers who tested on mice.
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Original:  Researchers from the National Institutes of Health injected doses of vitamin C of four grams per kilo of body weight into mice with pancreatic, brain and ovarian cancers, which started a destructive chain reaction with the cancer cells.
Revised:  Researchers at the National Institutes of Health injected doses of vitamin C of four grams per kilo of body weight into mice with pancreatic, brain and ovarian cancers, which started a destructive chain reaction with the cancer cells.
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Original:  Linus Pauling in 1954 Treating cancer with vitamin C was considered in the 1970s by American scientist Linus Pauling, who won the chemistry Nobel Prize in 1954.
Revised:  Linus Pauling in 1954 Treating cancer with vitamin C was considered in the 1970s by American scientist Linus Pauling, who won the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1954.
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Original: A diagram of Vitamin C Vitamin C  can help cut the spread of cancer and tumours by half, according to United States researchers who tested on mice.
Revised:  Vitamin C can help cut the spread of cancer and tumours by half, according to United States researchers who tested on mice.
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Original:  Linus Pauling in 1954 Treating cancer with vitamin C was considered in the 1970s by American scientist Linus Pauling, who won the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1954.
Revised:  Treating cancer with vitamin C was considered in the 1970s by American scientist Linus Pauling, who won the Nobel Prize in Chemistry in 1954.
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Original:  They also sated that anyone intrested in getting their pet cloned should contact them
Revised:  They also stated that anyone intrested in getting their pet cloned should contact them
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Original:  The number more than doubles the present estimated population of 50–100 thousand.
Revised:  The number more than doubles the present estimated population of 50-100 thousand.
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Original: 200px|Wayne Rooney, May 2008.
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Original: 140px|Location of Qinghai, China An earthquake measuring 6.0 on the Richter Scale has struck the area of Southern Qinghai, China.
Revised: 140px|Location of Qinghai, China An earthquake with a magnitude 6.0 on the Richter Scale has struck the area of Southern Qinghai, China.
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Original: 140px|Location of Qinghai, China An earthquake measuring 6.0 on the Richter Scale has struck the area of Southern Qinghai, China.
Revised: 140px|Location of Qinghai, China An earthquake measuring 6.0 has struck the area of Southern Qinghai, China.
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Original:  The United States Geological Survey picked up the quake at 21:59 hours UTC ( 05.59 AM at the epicenter).
Revised:  The United States Geological Survey (USGS) recorded the quake at 21:59 hours UTC ( 05.59 AM at the epicenter).
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Original:  The quake, which is in the same area of China as  one on May 12 that killed at least 69,207 people, while wounding at least 374,468, according to the English language edition of the People's Online Daily.
Revised:  The quak struck in the same area of China as one on May 12 that killed at least 69,207 people, while wounding at least 374,468, according to the English language edition of the People's Online Daily.
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Original:  The quake, which is in the same area of China as  one on May 12 that killed at least 69,207 people, while wounding at least 374,468, according to the English language edition of the People's Online Daily.
Revised:  The quake, which is in the same area of China as the one on May 12 that killed at least 69,207 people, while wounding at least 374,468, according to the English language edition of the People's Online Daily.
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Original:  It struck in the same area of China as the one on May 12 that killed at least 69,207 people, while wounding at least 374,468, according to the English language edition of the People's Online Daily .
Revised:  It struck in the same area of China as the one on May 12 that killed at least 69,207 people, while wounding at least 374,468, according to the English language edition of the People's Online Daily 
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Original:   The quake struck 45 kilometers (25 miles) Northwest of Guangyuan, Sichuan, near the town of Yaodu.
Revised:  The quake struck 45 kilometers (25 miles) northwest of Guangyuan, Sichuan, near the town of Yaodu.
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Original:  It struck in the same area of China as the one on May 12 that killed at least 69,207 people , while wounding at least 374,468, according to the English language edition of the People's Online Daily.
Revised:  It struck in the same area of China as the one on May 12 that killed at least 69,207 people and wounded another 374,468, according to the English language edition of the People's Online Daily.
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Original: From this September, British schools will be informing parents of their children's weight, in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity  .
Revised: Starting in September, British schools will be informing parents of their children's weight, in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity .
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Original: From this September, British schools will be informing parents of their children's weight, in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity  .
Revised: From this September, British schools will inform parents of their children's weight, in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity .
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Original: From this September, British schools will be informing parents of their children's weight, in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity  .
Revised: From this September, British schools will be informing parents of their children's weight, in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity , according to an announcement by the Department of Health (DoH) .
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Original:  Standard procedures in schools involve weighing and measuring children in schools to determine their BMI , and the information is passed on to the NHS to determine the extent of obesity in the area.
Revised:  Standard procedures in schools involve weighing and measuring children in schools to determine their body mass index (BMI) , and the information is passed on to the NHS to determine the extent of obesity in the area.
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Original:  Parents will then be sent a letter if their child is overweight.
Revised:  Parents will be sent a letter if their child is overweight.
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Original:  Parents will then be sent a letter if their child is overweight.
Revised:  Parents will then be sent a letter of their child's weight. It will include advice on what to do if the child is overweight.
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Original:  Research has shown that parents often don't realise their child is overweight, and the letters will be a "wake-up call" to them  
Revised:  Research has shown that parents often do not realise their child is overweight, and the letters will be a "wake-up call" to them 
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Original:  Research has shown that parents often don't realise their child is overweight, and the letters will be a "wake-up call" to them  
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Original: Parents will now be informed if their child is overweight Starting in September, British schools will inform parents of their children 's weight , in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity, according to an announcement by the Department of Health (DoH).
Revised: Parents will now be informed if their child is overweight Starting in September, British schools will inform parents of their child 's weight , in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity, according to an announcement by the Department of Health (DoH).
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Original: Parents will now be informed if their child is overweight Starting in September, British schools will inform parents of their children 's weight , in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity, according to an announcement by the Department of Health (DoH).
Revised: Parents will now be informed if their child is overweight Starting in September, British schools will inform parents of their children 's weight in an attempt to deal with the growing issue of obesity, according to an announcement by the Department of Health (DoH).
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Original:  Standard procedures in schools involve weighing and measuring children in schools to determine their body mass index (BMI) , and the information is passed on to the NHS to determine the extent of obesity in the area.
Revised:  Standard procedures in schools involve weighing and measuring children in schools to determine their body mass index (BMI) . The information is passed on to the NHS to determine the extent of obesity in the area.
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Original:  Standard procedures in schools involve weighing and measuring children in schools to determine their body mass index (BMI) , and the information is passed on to the NHS to determine the extent of obesity in the area.
Revised:  Standard procedures in schools involve weighing and measuring children in schools to determine their body mass index (BMI) , and the information is passed on to the National Health Service (NHS) to determine the extent of obesity in the area.
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Original:  Parents will  be sent a letter of their child's weight .
Revised:  Parents will soon be sent a letter of their child's weight .
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Original:  The letters will give advice to parents, such as the problems caused by obesity like diabetes, and how to overcome the problems.
Revised:  The letters will provide useful information to parents, such as the problems caused by obesity like diabetes, and how to overcome the problems.
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Original:  The letters will give advice to parents, such as the problems caused by obesity like diabetes, and how to overcome the problems.
Revised:  The letters will give advice to parents, such as the problems caused by obesity like diabetes, and how to overcome these problems.
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Original:  Standard procedures in schools involve weighing and measuring children in schools to determine their body mass index (BMI).
Revised:  Standard procedures in schools involve weighing and measuring children in schools to determine their (BMI).
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Original:  The letters will provide useful information to parents, such as the problems caused by obesity like diabetes , and how to overcome these problems.
Revised:  The letters will provide useful information to parents, such as the problems caused by obesity like , and how to overcome these problems.
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Original:  ]] Students for a Free Tibet have said that some of their activists have been detained in Beijing after protesting near an Olympic stadium, holding banners such as “ One World, One Dream: Free Tibet ” and "Tibet Will Be Free.
Revised:  ]] Students for a Free Tibet have said that some of their activists have been detained in Beijing after protesting near an Olympic stadium, holding banners such as " One World, One Dream: Free Tibet ” and "Tibet Will Be Free.
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Original:  ]] Students for a Free Tibet have said that some of their activists have been detained in Beijing after protesting near an Olympic stadium, holding banners such as “ One World, One Dream: Free Tibet ” and "Tibet Will Be Free.
Revised:  ]] Students for a Free Tibet have said that some of their activists have been detained in Beijing after protesting near an Olympic stadium, holding banners such as “ One World, One Dream: Free Tibet " and "Tibet Will Be Free.
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Original:  ” Lhadon Tethong, Executive Director of Students for a Free Tibet, made a statement after the alleged action.
Revised:  " Lhadon Tethong, Executive Director of Students for a Free Tibet, made a statement after the alleged action.
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Original:  “ At this very moment, Tibetans are facing the most severe and violent repression they have seen in decades at the hands of the Chinese government, and we have taken nonviolent action at this critical time to draw the world’s attention to the crisis gripping Tibet.
Revised:  " At this very moment, Tibetans are facing the most severe and violent repression they have seen in decades at the hands of the Chinese government, and we have taken nonviolent action at this critical time to draw the world’s attention to the crisis gripping Tibet.
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Original:  ” “ Days before the Olympic Games begin, and as all eyes turn to China, we appeal to the world to remember that millions of Tibetans are crying out for human rights and freedom, ” said the Deputy Director of the protest group.
Revised:  " “ Days before the Olympic Games begin, and as all eyes turn to China, we appeal to the world to remember that millions of Tibetans are crying out for human rights and freedom, ” said the Deputy Director of the protest group.
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Original:  ” “ Days before the Olympic Games begin, and as all eyes turn to China, we appeal to the world to remember that millions of Tibetans are crying out for human rights and freedom, ” said the Deputy Director of the protest group.
Revised:  ” " Days before the Olympic Games begin, and as all eyes turn to China, we appeal to the world to remember that millions of Tibetans are crying out for human rights and freedom, ” said the Deputy Director of the protest group.
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Original:  ” “ Days before the Olympic Games begin, and as all eyes turn to China, we appeal to the world to remember that millions of Tibetans are crying out for human rights and freedom, ” said the Deputy Director of the protest group.
Revised:  ” “ Days before the Olympic Games begin, and as all eyes turn to China, we appeal to the world to remember that millions of Tibetans are crying out for human rights and freedom, " said the Deputy Director of the protest group.
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Original:  “ As the Chinese leadership prepares its display of grandeur and power in Beijing, trying to convince the world of its new tolerance and openness, it is waging a ruthless campaign of repression inside Tibet. ”
Revised:  " As the Chinese leadership prepares its display of grandeur and power in Beijing, trying to convince the world of its new tolerance and openness, it is waging a ruthless campaign of repression inside Tibet. ”
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Original:  “ As the Chinese leadership prepares its display of grandeur and power in Beijing, trying to convince the world of its new tolerance and openness, it is waging a ruthless campaign of repression inside Tibet. ”
Revised:  “ As the Chinese leadership prepares its display of grandeur and power in Beijing, trying to convince the world of its new tolerance and openness, it is waging a ruthless campaign of repression inside Tibet. "
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Original:  ]] Students for a Free Tibet have said that some of their activists have been detained in Beijing after protesting near an Olympic stadium, holding banners such as "One World, One Dream: Free Tibet" and "Tibet Will Be Free."
Revised:  ]] Students for a Free Tibet has announced that some of their activists have been detained in Beijing after protesting near an Olympic stadium, holding banners such as "One World, One Dream: Free Tibet" and "Tibet Will Be Free."
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Original:  ]] Students for a Free Tibet have said that some of their activists have been detained in Beijing after protesting near an Olympic stadium, holding banners such as "One World, One Dream: Free Tibet" and "Tibet Will Be Free."
Revised:  ]] Students for a Free Tibet have said that some of its activists have been detained in Beijing after protesting near an Olympic stadium, holding banners such as "One World, One Dream: Free Tibet" and "Tibet Will Be Free."
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Original:  A British Embassy spokesman said that they are "are in touch with the Chinese authorities and are requesting immediate consular access should this information be correct."
Revised:  A British Embassy spokesman said that they "are in touch with the Chinese authorities and are requesting immediate consular access should this information be correct."
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