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Original: Defense lawyer Bill Roe argued self defence for Dagenais, saying he shot "in a blind panic" when RCMP officers fired upon him.
Revised: Defense lawyer Bill Roe argued self defense for Dagenais, saying he shot "in a blind panic" when RCMP officers fired upon him.
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Original:  The day began with a dispute within the Dagenais family.
Revised:  The incident began with a dispute within the Dagenais family.
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Original:  Dagenais claims that Cameron made the intial approach to arrest him and smashed his truck window . Dagenais became scared and sped away from the situation.
Revised:  Dagenais claims that Cameron made the intial approach to arrest him and smashed his truck window , at which point Dagenais became scared and sped away from the situation.
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Original:  Officers Cameron and Bourdages followed  in a police truck , Knopp followed in a SUV.
Revised:  Officers Cameron and Bourdages followed in a police truck ; Knopp followed in a SUV.
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Original:  The RCMP say that Dagenais was unpredictable and that Dagenais had rammed their vehicle.
Revised:  The RCMP say that Dagenais was unpredictable and that he had rammed their vehicle.
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Original:  A firearm expert studying trajectories , found that one of the bullets fired from Daganais' .30-30 Winchester entered the police vehicle at a different angle than other shots fired at the truck after the collision.
Revised:  A firearm expert studying trajectories of the bullets found that one of the bullets fired from Daganais' .30-30 Winchester entered the police vehicle at a different angle than other shots fired at the truck after the collision.
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Original:  A firearm expert studying trajectories , found that one of the bullets fired from Daganais' .30-30 Winchester entered the police vehicle at a different angle than other shots fired at the truck after the collision.
Revised:  A firearm expert studying trajectories , found that one of the rounds fired from Daganais' .30-30 Winchester entered the police vehicle at a different angle than other shots fired at the truck after the collision.
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Original:  During the gunfight, firearms experts established that Dagenais fired eight times, and the RCMP six times  .
Revised:  Firearms experts established that Dagenais fired eight times, and the RCMP six times .
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Original:  During the gunfight, firearms experts established that Dagenais fired eight times, and the RCMP six times  .
Revised:  During the gunfight, firearms experts established that Dagenais fired eight times, and the RCMP six times during the gunfight .
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Original:  The audio from the RCMP radio was submitted  , and the dispatcher had opened all the channels associated with the Shellbrook area.
Revised:  The audio from the RCMP radio was submitted as evidence , and the dispatcher had opened all the channels associated with the Shellbrook area.
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Original: The current scheduled mission , STS-119, is set to fly the Integrated Truss Structure segment ("S" for starboard, the right side of the station, and "6" for its place at the very end of the starboard truss) and install the final set of power-generating solar arrays to the International Space Station .
Revised: The current scheduled mission is set to fly the Integrated Truss Structure segment ("S" for starboard, the right side of the station, and "6" for its place at the very end of the starboard truss) and install the final set of power-generating solar arrays to the International Space Station .
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Original: The current scheduled mission , STS-119, is set to fly the Integrated Truss Structure segment ("S" for starboard, the right side of the station, and "6" for its place at the very end of the starboard truss) and install the final set of power-generating solar arrays to the International Space Station .
Revised: The current scheduled mission , STS-119, is set to fly the Integrated Truss Structure segment ("S" for starboard, the right side of the station, and "6" for its place at the very end of the starboard truss) and install the final set of power-generating solar arrays to the ISS .
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Original:   Discovery was originally scheduled to liftoff on February 12.
Revised:  Discovery 's originally scheduled liftoff date was February 12.
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Original: NASA said during a press conference today that the leak is likely being caused by a "hardware issue" , later announced to be a suspect connector on the gaseous vent line attached to the shuttle's external tank.
Revised: NASA said during a press conference today that the leak is likely being caused by a hardware issue , later announced to be a suspect connector on the gaseous vent line attached to the shuttle's external tank.
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Original:  Saskatchewan Agriculture Minister Bob Bjornerud endorses a ban on wild boar farming.
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Original:  3\% of wild boars escape.
Revised:  3\% of farmed "wild" boars escape.
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Original:  Livestock, horses, cows run from wild boars  breaking through fences 120px| The Wild Boar (Sus scrofa) is the wild ancestor of the domestic pig .
Revised:  Horses, cows, and other livestock run from wild boars breaking through fences 120px| The Wild Boar (Sus scrofa) is the wild ancestor of the domestic pig .
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Original:  Livestock, horses, cows run from wild boars  breaking through fences 120px| The Wild Boar (Sus scrofa) is the wild ancestor of the domestic pig .
Revised:  Livestock, horses, cows run from wild boars , breaking through fences 120px| The Wild Boar (Sus scrofa) is the wild ancestor of the domestic pig .
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Original:  Livestock, horses, cows run from wild boars  breaking through fences 120px| The Wild Boar (Sus scrofa) is the wild ancestor of the domestic pig .
Revised:  Livestock, horses, cows run from wild boars breaking through fences in the process .
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Original:  Ostriches, emus, llamas, alpacas, reindeer, wild boar and fallow deer were amongst those introduced to farms  during the agricultural diversification program in the late 1970s.
Revised:  Ostriches, emus, llamas, alpacas, reindeer, wild boar and fallow deer were amongst the animals introduced to farms during the agricultural diversification program in the late 1970s.
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Original:  Production of wild boars was promoted throughout the 1980s. 120px|Wild boar, female with 2 young The  red meat is an export commodity to Europe and Asia.
Revised:  Production of wild boars was promoted throughout the 1980s. The red meat is an export commodity to Europe and Asia.
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Original:  Production of wild boars was promoted throughout the 1980s. 120px|Wild boar, female with 2 young The  red meat is an export commodity to Europe and Asia.
Revised:  Production of wild boars was promoted throughout the 1980s. 120px|Wild boar, female with 2 young The boar's red meat is an export commodity to Europe and Asia.
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Original:  Full blooded wild bear and hybrid crosses are raised . 120px|The Wild Boar (Sus scrofa) is the wild ancestor of the domestic pig
Revised:  Full blooded wild bear and hybrid crosses are raised 120px|The Wild Boar (Sus scrofa) is the wild ancestor of the domestic pig
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Original:  Full blooded wild bear and hybrid crosses are raised . 120px|The Wild Boar (Sus scrofa) is the wild ancestor of the domestic pig
Revised:  Full blooded wild bear and hybrid crosses are raised . 
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Original:  Wild boar, female with 2 young At the Saskatchewan Association of Rural Municipalities (SARM) conference, a resolution  encourages the Government of Saskatchewan, Canada to place a moratorium on speciality livestock farms raising wild boar.
Revised:  Wild boar, female with 2 young At the Saskatchewan Association of Rural Municipalities (SARM) conference, a resolution was passed that encourages the Government of Saskatchewan, Canada to place a moratorium on speciality livestock farms raising wild boar.
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Original:  Two litters of approximately 12 piglets are sired by each wild boar sow every year .
Revised:  Two litters of approximately 12 piglets are sired by each wild boar sow every year 
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Original:  The Wild Boar (Sus scrofa) is the wild ancestor of the domestic pig .
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Original:  Full blooded wild bear and hybrid crosses are raised
Revised:  Full blooded wild boar and hybrid crosses are raised
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Original: Ostriches, emus, llamas, alpacas, reindeer, wild boar , and fallow deer were amongst the animals introduced to farms in Saskatchewan during the agricultural diversification program in the late 1970s.
Revised: Ostriches, emus, llamas, alpacas, reindeer, wild boar and fallow deer were amongst the animals introduced to farms in Saskatchewan during the agricultural diversification program in the late 1970s.
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Original: Ostriches, emus, llamas, alpacas, reindeer, wild boar  and fallow deer were amongst the animals introduced to farms in Saskatchewan during the agricultural diversification program in the late 1970s.
Revised: Ostriches, emus, llamas, alpacas, reindeer, wild boar , and fallow deer were amongst the animals introduced to farms in Saskatchewan during the agricultural diversification program in the late 1970s.
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Original:  Apple has worked hard not to make this a race to the bottom," said a market analyst for Jupiter Research  
Revised:  Apple has worked hard not to make this a race to the bottom," said a market analyst for Jupiter Research . 
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Original:  Yesterday, Apple Computer revealed the third-generation version of its iPod Suffle model, which introduces new features including a voice that tells the user what song is playing in their playlist through the user's headphones.
Revised:  Yesterday, Apple Computer revealed the third-generation version of its iPod Shuffle model, which introduces new features including a voice that tells the user what song is playing in their playlist through the user's headphones.
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Original:  The 'curse' must end, and he must back Hanshin up to be a Japan Series Champion.  
Revised:  The 'curse' must end, and he must back Hanshin up to be a Japan Series Champion. " 
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Original:  The 'curse' must end, and he must back Hanshin up to be a Japan Series Champion.  
Revised:  The 'curse' must end, and he must back Hanshin up to be a Japan Series Champion. Relate
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Original:  Though covered with mud, he was still smiling as  23 and a half years before.
Revised:  Though covered with mud, he was still smiling as he was 23 and a half years before.
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Original:  In October 1985, the statue was tossed into the river by some overjoyed fans of  Hanshin Tigers baseball team, which led to a 'legend' known as "the Curse of Colonel Sanders."
Revised:  In October 1985, the statue was tossed into the river by some overjoyed fans of the Hanshin Tigers baseball team, which led to a 'legend' known as "the Curse of Colonel Sanders."
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Original:  The workers pulled it up, and soon Tigers fans among them recognized the figure as the Colonel.
Revised:  The workers pulled it up, and Tigers fans among them recognized the figure as the Colonel.
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Original:  The statue still lacks some parts like eyeglasses, feet and left hand, but the contractor reportedly says it's almost impossible for the rest to be found, due to lack of eyesight in the water.
Revised:  The statue still lacks some parts like eyeglasses, feet and left hand, but the contractor reportedly says it's almost impossible for the rest to be found, due to lack of visibility in the water.
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Original:  Reportedly the company considers the statue may be displayed at its franchise in  Tigers home Hanshin Kōshien Stadium in Nishinomiya City, Hyōgo Prefecture (neighboring Osaka Pref.).
Revised:  Reportedly the company is considering displaying the statue at its franchise in Tigers home Hanshin Kōshien Stadium in Nishinomiya City, Hyōgo Prefecture (neighboring Osaka Pref.).
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Original:  Reportedly the company considers the statue may be displayed at its franchise in  Tigers home Hanshin Kōshien Stadium in Nishinomiya City, Hyōgo Prefecture (neighboring Osaka Pref.).
Revised:  Reportedly the company considers the statue may be displayed at its franchise in the Tigers home Hanshin Kōshien Stadium in Nishinomiya City, Hyōgo Prefecture (neighboring Osaka Pref.).
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Original:  Some were overjoyed even enough to jump into the river for the team players , but unfortunately no one among them looked like Randy Bass, the team's star slugger.
Revised:  Some were so overjoyed that they jumped into the river for the team players , but unfortunately no one among them looked like Randy Bass, the team's star slugger.
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Original:  Some were overjoyed even enough to jump into the river for the team players , but unfortunately no one among them looked like Randy Bass, the team's star slugger.
Revised:  Some were overjoyed even enough to jump into the river for the team players . Unfortunately no one among them looked like Randy Bass, the team's star slugger.
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Original:  However, this was  Hanshin Tigers last triumph.
Revised:  However, this was the Hanshin Tigers last triumph.
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Original:  The team soon fell into a long-term slump,  finished at the bottom among 6 Central League teams in 10 of 16 seasons by 2001.
Revised:  The team soon fell into a long-term slump, and finished at the bottom among 6 Central League teams in 10 of 16 seasons by 2001.
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Original:  During the slump, some baseball lovers in Japan jokingly said like "it was brought by the Curse of Colonel Sanders" and that became something like a legend.
Revised:  During the slump, some baseball lovers in Japan jokingly said "it was brought by the Curse of Colonel Sanders" and that became something like a legend.
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Original:  During the slump, some baseball lovers in Japan jokingly said like "it was brought by the Curse of Colonel Sanders" and that became something like a legend.
Revised:  During the slump, some baseball lovers in Japan jokingly said like "it was brought by the Curse of Colonel Sanders" which became a legend.
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Original:  The 'curse' must end, and he must back Hanshin up to be a Japan Series Champion. " Relate
Revised:  The 'curse' must end, and he must back Hanshin up to be a Japan Series Champion. Relate
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Original:  The 'curse' must end, and he must back Hanshin up to be a Japan Series Champion. " Relate
Revised:  The 'curse' must end, and he must back Hanshin up to be a Japan Series Champion. " 
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Original:  They started to chant "Baassu, Baassu" and tossed the Colonel statue into the river in honor of their hero !
Revised:  They started to chant "Baassu, Baassu" and tossed the Colonel statue into the river in honor of their hero .
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Original: File:Hatshepsut.jpg|Djehuty was an official of Hatshepsut A team of archaeologists excavating an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the burial site in the Valley of the Kings in Luxor, Egypt.
Revised:  A team of archaeologists excavating an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the burial site in the Valley of the Kings in Luxor, Egypt.
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Original:  The Valley of the KingsThe discovery was announced by Farouk Hosni, Egypt's current Minister of Culture.
Revised:  The discovery was announced by Farouk Hosni, Egypt's current Minister of Culture.
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Original: A team of archaeologists excavating an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the burial site in the Valley of the Kings  in Luxor, Egypt.
Revised: A team of archaeologists who excavated an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the burial site in the Valley of the Kings in Luxor, Egypt.
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Original: A team of archaeologists excavating an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the burial site in the Valley of the Kings  in Luxor, Egypt.
Revised: A team of archaeologists excavating an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the Valley of the Kings in Luxor, Egypt.
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Original: A team of archaeologists excavating an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the burial site in the Valley of the Kings  in Luxor, Egypt.
Revised: A team of archaeologists excavating an Ancient Egyptian tomb have discovered golden jewelry in a recently-discovered lower chamber at the burial site in the Valley of the Kings burial site in Luxor, Egypt.
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Original:  The Valley of the KingsTwo golden rings and five golden earrings were found in the tomb of Djehuty, an 18th-dynasty official of Queen Hatshepsut, and were probably the property of Djehuty or his family.
Revised:  Two golden rings and five golden earrings were found in the tomb of Djehuty, an 18th-dynasty official of Queen Hatshepsut, and were probably the property of Djehuty or his family.
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Original:  Djehuty was  overseer of the treasury and overseer of works under Hatshepsut , who reigned approximately 1479-1458 BCE (although these dates are disputed), and in that position would have been responsible not only for managing the huge amounts of precious goods brought in from Egypt's military expedition to Punt in the Horn of Africa but also the vast building projects of Hatshepsut which have made the female pharaoh one of the most-remembered of any from ancient Egypt.
Revised:  Djehuty was overseer of the treasury and overseer of works for the Queen. Hatshepsut reigned approximately 1479-1458 BCE (although these dates are disputed), and in that position would have been responsible not only for managing the huge amounts of precious goods brought in from Egypt's military expedition to Punt in the Horn of Africa but also the vast building projects of Hatshepsut which have made the female pharaoh one of the most-remembered of any from ancient Egypt.
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Original:  Djehuty was  overseer of the treasury and overseer of works under Hatshepsut , who reigned approximately 1479-1458 BCE (although these dates are disputed), and in that position would have been responsible not only for managing the huge amounts of precious goods brought in from Egypt's military expedition to Punt in the Horn of Africa but also the vast building projects of Hatshepsut which have made the female pharaoh one of the most-remembered of any from ancient Egypt.
Revised:  Djehuty was overseer of the treasury and overseer of works under Hatshepsut , who reigned approximately 1479-1458 BCE according to Dr. Zahi Hawass, Secretary General of Egypt’s Supreme Council of Antiquities. Djehuty was responsible for managing the huge amounts of precious goods brought in from Egypt's military expedition to Punt in the Horn of Africa but also the vast building projects of Hatshepsut which have made the female pharaoh one of the most-remembered of any from ancient Egypt.
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Original:  Djehuty was  overseer of the treasury and overseer of works under Hatshepsut , who reigned approximately 1479-1458 BCE (although these dates are disputed), and in that position would have been responsible not only for managing the huge amounts of precious goods brought in from Egypt's military expedition to Punt in the Horn of Africa but also the vast building projects of Hatshepsut which have made the female pharaoh one of the most-remembered of any from ancient Egypt.
Revised:  Djehuty was overseer of the treasury and overseer of works under Hatshepsut , who reigned approximately 1479-1458 BCE (although these dates are disputed), and in that position would have been responsible not only for managing the huge amounts of precious goods brought in from Egypt's military expedition to Punt in the Horn of Africaand the vast building projects of Hatshepsut which have made the female pharaoh one of the most-remembered of any from ancient Egypt.
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Original:  Djehuty died after Hatshepsut did, sometime during the reign of Thutmosis III , and both Hatshepsut's and Thutmosis's names are recorded on the tomb ;
Revised:  Djehuty died after Hatshepsut did, sometime during the reign of Thutmosis III . Both Hatshepsut's and Thutmosis's names are recorded on the tomb ;
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Original:  The discovery was announced by Farouk Hosni, Egypt's current Minister of Culture.
Revised:  The 
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Original:  The team, led by José Manuel Galán of the National Research Center (Consejo Superior de Investigaciones Científicas, CSIC), in Madrid, Spain, has been excavating the tomb, designated TT11 and located in the necropolis of Dra' Abu el-Naga', since 2002.
Revised:  team, led by José Manuel Galán of the National Research Center (Consejo Superior de Investigaciones Científicas, CSIC), in Madrid, Spain, has been excavating the tomb, designated TT11 and located in the necropolis of Dra' Abu el-Naga', since 2002.
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Original:  The team, led by José Manuel Galán of the National Research Center (Consejo Superior de Investigaciones Científicas, CSIC), in Madrid, Spain, has been excavating the tomb, designated TT11 and located in the necropolis of Dra' Abu el-Naga', since 2002.
Revised:  The team, led by José Manuel Galán of the National Research Center (Consejo Superior de Investigaciones Científicas, CSIC), in Madrid, Spain, had been excavating the tomb, designated TT11 and located in the necropolis of Dra' Abu el-Naga', since 2002.
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Original:  While much of Djehuty's funerary equipment was lost to fire in antiquity, the lower chamber of his tomb was concealed at the end of a three-meter shaft  discovered at the end of 2008.
Revised:  While much of Djehuty's funerary equipment was lost to fire in antiquity, the lower chamber of his tomb was concealed at the end of a three-meter shaft and discovered at the end of 2008.
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Original:  Indeed, while a superficial description of the tomb itself was recorded almost two hundred years ago by 19th-century French Egyptologist Jean-François Champollion, rubble blocking the entrance hindered excavation until the 21st century.
Revised:  A superficial description of the tomb itself was recorded almost two hundred years ago by 19th-century French Egyptologist Jean-François Champollion, rubble blocking the entrance hindered excavation until the 21st century.
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Original:  Since excavation began, Djehuty's tomb has yielded a number of surprises , beginning with the discovery that the tomb was re-used repeatedly up to and during the Greco-Roman period , an unusual face-on depiction of pharaoh Thutmosis III hunting ducks, and the mummy of a young, bejewelled, as-yet unidentified woman.
Revised:  Since excavation began, Djehuty's tomb has yielded a number of surprises . It was discovered that the tomb was re-used repeatedly up to and during the Greco-Roman period , an unusual face-on depiction of pharaoh Thutmosis III hunting ducks, and the mummy of a young, bejewelled, as-yet unidentified woman.
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