wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into  present-day Eswatini (Swaziland)  .
Revised:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into present-day Eswatini (Swaziland) .
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Original:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into  present-day Eswatini (Swaziland)  .
Revised:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are descendant from Nguni-speaking clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into present-day Eswatini (Swaziland) .
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Original:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into  present-day Eswatini (Swaziland)  .
Revised:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from north East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into present-day Eswatini (Swaziland) .
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Original:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into  present-day Eswatini (Swaziland)  .
Revised:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later settled in south-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into present-day Eswatini (Swaziland) .
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Original:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into  present-day Eswatini (Swaziland)  .
Revised:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century . They moved into southern Mozambique, and then into present-day Eswatini (Swaziland) .
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Original:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into  present-day Eswatini (Swaziland)  .
Revised:  The dominant Swati language and culture are factors that unify Swazis as a nation since there is no other language spoken except for English . History The Swazis are Nguni clans, who migrated from North East Africa and later originated in South-east Africa in the fifteenth century , moved into southern Mozambique, and then into the region of present-day Eswatini (Swaziland) .
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Original:  The Swazis are people who are predominantly Nguni in language and culture .
Revised:  The Swazi are people who are predominantly Nguni in language and culture .
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Original:  The Swazis are people who are predominantly Nguni in language and culture .
Revised:  The Swazis are people who are predominantly descended from Nguni-language speakers .
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Original:  However some of the Swazi people originate from Sotho clans that were also inhabitants of Eswatini which is why the surname Maseko as the original Royal rulers in Eswatini is similar to Maseho in Lesotho .
Revised:  However some of the Swazi people originate from Sotho clans who were also inhabitants of Eswatini which is why the surname Maseko as the original Royal rulers in Eswatini is similar to Maseho in Lesotho .
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Original:  However some of the Swazi people originate from Sotho clans that were also inhabitants of Eswatini which is why the surname Maseko as the original Royal rulers in Eswatini is similar to Maseho in Lesotho .
Revised:  However some of the Swazi people originate from Sotho clans that were also inhabitants of Eswatini .
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Original:  His rule occurred from around 1745 until 1780 , and he ruled from the Shiselweni region of Swaziland .
Revised:  He ruled from around 1745 until 1780 , and he ruled from the Shiselweni region of Swaziland .
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Original:  His rule occurred from around 1745 until 1780 , and he ruled from the Shiselweni region of Swaziland .
Revised:  His rule occurred from around 1745 until 1780 at the Shiselweni region of Swaziland .
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Original:  Here the Swazis continued the process of expansion by conquering numerous small Sotho and Nguni speaking tribes to build up a large composite state today called Swaziland.
Revised:  Here the Swazis continued the process of expansion by conquering numerous small Sotho and Nguni-speaking tribes to build up a large composite state today called Swaziland.
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Original:  Sobhuza I's rule occurred during the umfecane wars, resulting from the expansion of the Zulu state under Shaka .
Revised:  Sobhuza I's rule occurred during the Mfecane .
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Original:  To establish a peaceful coexistence, a substantial portion of Swazi territory was ceded to the Transvaal Boers who were settled around the Lydenburg area in the 1840s.
Revised:  A substantial portion of Swazi territory was ceded to the Transvaal Boers who were settled around the Lydenburg area in the 1840s.
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Original:  It was during the rule of Mswati II, that the Swazi nation was further unifiedand the people and their country became known as they are today .
Revised:  It was during the rule of Mswati II, that the Swazi nation was unified .
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Original:  People of Swazi descent in South Africa are typically identifiable by speaking SiSwati, or a dialect of the language.
Revised:  People of Swazi descent in South Africa are typically identifiable by speaking SiSwati, or a dialect of that language.
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Original:  There are also many Swazi immigrants who go to South Africa and the United Kingdom for study, or work opportunities .
Revised:  There are also many Swazi migrants in South Africa and the United Kingdom for study, or work opportunities .
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Original:  There are also many Swazi immigrants who go to South Africa and the United Kingdom for study, or work opportunities .
Revised:  There are also many Swazi immigrants who go to South Africa and the United Kingdom .
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Original:  In modern day Swaziland , Swazi people include  Swazi citizens regardless of  ethnicity.
Revised:  In modern day Swaziland , Swazi people include all Swazi citizens regardless of ethnicity.
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Original:  In modern day Swaziland , Swazi people include  Swazi citizens regardless of  ethnicity.
Revised:  In modern day Swaziland , Swazi people include Swazi citizens regardless of their ethnicity.
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Original:  Most Swazis intertwine this belief with modern day Christianity that was brought by the missionaries , yet many remain faithful to their original African spiritual beliefs.
Revised:  Most Swazis intertwine this belief with modern day Christianity that was brought by the missionaries . Many continue to practice their traditional spiritual beliefs.
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Original: The Swazi () are a Bantu ethnic group of Southern Africa, predominantly inhabiting eSwatini , South Africa's Mpumalanga province, and Mozambique.
Revised: The Swazi () are a Bantu ethnic group in Southern Africa, predominantly inhabiting eSwatini , South Africa's Mpumalanga province, and Mozambique.
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Original: The Swazi () are a Bantu ethnic group of Southern Africa, predominantly inhabiting eSwatini , South Africa's Mpumalanga province, and Mozambique.
Revised: The Swazi () are a Bantu ethnic group of Southern Africa, predominantly inhabiting Eswatini , South Africa's Mpumalanga province, and Mozambique.
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Original:  The Swazi people and the Kingdom of eSwatini today are named after Mswati II, who became king in 1839 after the death of his father King Sobhuza who strategically defeated the British who occupied Swaziland.
Revised:  The Swazi people and the Kingdom of Eswatini today are named after Mswati II, who became king in 1839 after the death of his father King Sobhuza who strategically defeated the British who occupied Swaziland.
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Original:  The Kingdom of Swaziland was a region  occupied by the San people of Southern Africa and the current Swazis came in from North Eastern regions through to Mozambique and eventually Swaziland in the 15th century.
Revised:  The Kingdom of Swaziland was a region first occupied by the San people of Southern Africa and the current Swazis came in from North Eastern regions through to Mozambique and eventually Swaziland in the 15th century.
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Original:  The Kingdom of Swaziland was a region  occupied by the San people of Southern Africa and the current Swazis came in from North Eastern regions through to Mozambique and eventually Swaziland in the 15th century.
Revised:  The Kingdom of Swaziland was a region occupied by the San people and the current Swazis came in from North Eastern regions through to Mozambique and eventually Swaziland in the 15th century.
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Original:  The Kingdom of Swaziland was a region  occupied by the San people of Southern Africa and the current Swazis came in from North Eastern regions through to Mozambique and eventually Swaziland in the 15th century.
Revised:  The Kingdom of Swaziland was a region occupied by the San people of Southern Africa and the current Swazis migrated from north East Africa through to Mozambique and eventually Swaziland in the 15th century.
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Original:  Mixtures with the San people and other Nguni tribes occurred.
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Original:  History The Swazis are descendant from Nguni-speaking clans, who migrated from north East Africa and later settled in south-east Africa in the fifteenth century.
Revised:  History The Swazis are descended from Nguni-speaking clans, who migrated from north East Africa and later settled in south-east Africa in the fifteenth century.
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Original:  They moved into southern Mozambique, and then into the region of present-day Eswatini (Swaziland) which at the time was inhabited by San people.
Revised:  They moved into southern Mozambique, and then into the region of present-day Eswatini which at the time was inhabited by San people.
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Original:  Later under Mbandzeni, many commercial, land  and mining concessions were granted to British and Boer settlers.
Revised:  Later under Mbandzeni, many commercial, land , and mining concessions were granted to British and Boer settlers.
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Original:  However some of the Swazi people originate from Sotho clans who were also inhabitants of Eswatini.
Revised:  However some of the Swati people originate from Sotho clans who were also inhabitants of Eswatini.
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Original:  In 1815, Sobhuza I became the king of Eswatini and was responsible for the establishment of Swazi power in central Eswatini.
Revised:  In 1815, Sobhuza I became the king of Eswatini and was responsible for the establishment of Swati power in central Eswatini.
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Original:  Here the Swazis continued the process of expansion by conquering numerous small Sotho and Nguni-speaking tribes to build up a large composite state today called Eswatini.
Revised:  Here the Swati people continued the process of expansion by conquering numerous small Sotho and Nguni-speaking tribes to build up a large composite state today called Eswatini.
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Original:  Under Sobhuza's leadership, the Nguni and Sotho peoples as well as remnant San groups were integrated into the Swazi nation.
Revised:  Under Sobhuza's leadership, the Nguni and Sotho peoples as well as remnant San groups were integrated into the Swati nation.
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Original:  A substantial portion of Swazi territory was ceded to the Transvaal Boers who were settled around the Lydenburg area in the 1840s.
Revised:  A substantial portion of Swati territory was ceded to the Transvaal Boers who were settled around the Lydenburg area in the 1840s.
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Original:  It was during the rule of Mswati II, that the Swazi nation was unified.
Revised:  It was during the rule of Mswati II, that the Swati nation was unified.
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Original:  The result was that a substantial Swazi population ended up residing outside Eswatini in South Africa.
Revised:  The result was that a substantial Swati population ended up residing outside Eswatini in South Africa.
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Original:  Today, Swazi people reside in both Eswatini and South Africa.
Revised:  Today, Swati people reside in both Eswatini and South Africa.
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Original:  People of Swazi descent in South Africa are typically identifiable by speaking SiSwati, or a dialect of that language.
Revised:  People of Swati descent in South Africa are typically identifiable by speaking SiSwati, or a dialect of that language.
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Original:  In modern day Eswatini, Swazi people include all Eswatini citizens regardless of their ethnicity.
Revised:  In modern day Eswatini, Swati people include all Eswatini citizens regardless of their ethnicity.
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Original:  The Swazi are part of the Nguni-language speaking peoples whose origins can be traced through archaeology to East Africa where similar traditions, beliefs and cultural practices are found.
Revised:  EmaSwati are part of the Nguni-language speaking peoples whose origins can be traced through archaeology to East Africa where similar traditions, beliefs and cultural practices are found.
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Original:  The Swazi people and the Kingdom of Eswatini today are named after Mswati II, who became king in 1839 after the death of his father King Sobhuza who strategically defeated the British who occupied Eswatini.
Revised:  The Swati people and the Kingdom of Eswatini today are named after Mswati II, who became king in 1839 after the death of his father King Sobhuza who strategically defeated the British who occupied Eswatini.
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Original:  This ceremony, also known as the "First Fruits" ceremony  marks the King's tasting of the new harvest.
Revised:  This ceremony, also known as the "First Fruits" ceremony , marks the King's tasting of the new harvest.
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Original: The central role of students in the armed secessionist rebellion aided by India and other countries would contribute to the killing of Bengali students and intellectuals on Dhaka University grounds on 25 March at the start of Operation Searchlight and  another massacre of Bengali intellectuals on 14 December, two days before the Pakistani military's defeat and surrender and Bangladesh's resulting independence.
Revised: The central role of students in the armed secessionist rebellion aided by India and other countries would cause the Pakistani military to kill Bengali students and intellectuals on Dhaka University grounds on 25 March at the start of Operation Searchlight and another massacre of Bengali intellectuals on 14 December, two days before the Pakistani military's defeat and surrender and Bangladesh's resulting independence.
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Original: The central role of students in the armed secessionist rebellion aided by India and other countries would contribute to the killing of Bengali students and intellectuals on Dhaka University grounds on 25 March at the start of Operation Searchlight and  another massacre of Bengali intellectuals on 14 December, two days before the Pakistani military's defeat and surrender and Bangladesh's resulting independence.
Revised: The central role of students in the armed secessionist rebellion aided by India and other countries would contribute to the killing of Bengali students and intellectuals on Dhaka University grounds on 25 March at the start of Operation Searchlight and commit another massacre of Bengali intellectuals on 14 December, two days before the Pakistani military's defeat and surrender and Bangladesh's resulting independence.
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Original: The central role of students in the armed secessionist rebellion aided by India and other countries would contribute to the killing of Bengali students and intellectuals on Dhaka University grounds on 25 March at the start of Operation Searchlight and  another massacre of Bengali intellectuals on 14 December, two days before the Pakistani military's defeat and surrender and Bangladesh's resulting independence.
Revised: The central role of students in the armed secessionist rebellion aided by India and other countries would contribute to the killing of Bengali students and intellectuals on Dhaka University grounds on 25 March at the start of Operation Searchlight and another massacre of Bengali intellectuals on 14 December, two days before its defeat and surrender and Bangladesh's resulting independence.
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Original: The Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad (English: Independent Bangladesh Students Movement Council) was an armed underground student political group secretly organized in 1961 by Mujibur Rahman, the founder of Bangladesh, that worked  wage an armed secessionist struggle against Pakistani rule and achieve the independence of East Pakistan as "Bangladesh," then part of Pakistan.
Revised: The Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad (English: Independent Bangladesh Students Movement Council) was an armed underground student political group secretly organized in 1961 by Mujibur Rahman, the founder of Bangladesh, that worked to wage an armed secessionist struggle against Pakistani rule and achieve the independence of East Pakistan as "Bangladesh," then part of Pakistan.
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Original: The Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad (English: Independent Bangladesh Students Movement Council) was an armed underground student political group secretly organized in 1961 by sirajul alam khan, the founder of Bangladesh, that worked to wage an armed secessionist struggle against Pakistani rule and achieve the independence of East Pakistan as "Bangladesh," then part of Pakistan.
Revised: The Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad (English: Independent Bangladesh Students Movement Council) was an armed underground student political group secretly organized in 1961 by serajul alam khan, the founder of Bangladesh, that worked to wage an armed secessionist struggle against Pakistani rule and achieve the independence of East Pakistan as "Bangladesh," then part of Pakistan.
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Original: The Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad (English: Independent Bangladesh Students Movement Council) was an armed underground student political group secretly organized in 1961 by serajul alam khan , the founder of Bangladesh, that worked to wage an armed secessionist struggle against Pakistani rule and achieve the independence of East Pakistan as "Bangladesh," then part of Pakistan.
Revised: The Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad (English: Independent Bangladesh Students Movement Council) was an armed underground student political group secretly organized in 1961 by Serajul Alam Khan , the founder of Bangladesh, that worked to wage an armed secessionist struggle against Pakistani rule and achieve the independence of East Pakistan as "Bangladesh," then part of Pakistan.
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Original: The Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad (English: Independent Bangladesh Students Movement Council) was an armed underground student political group secretly organized in 1961 by Serajul Alam Khan, the founder of Bangladesh, that worked to wage an armed secessionist struggle against Pakistani rule and achieve the independence of East Pakistan as "Bangladesh," then part of Pakistan.
Revised: The Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad (English: Independent Bangladesh Students Movement Council) was an armed underground student political group secretly organized in 1961 by Serajul Alam Khan, a key founder of Bangladesh, that worked to wage an armed secessionist struggle against Pakistani rule and achieve the independence of East Pakistan as "Bangladesh," then part of Pakistan.
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Original:  Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad was clandestinely organized in Dhaka University's Jahrul Hoque Hall by Mujibur Rahman under command of Sirajul Alam Khan (who was from the same university) along with Abdur Razzak and Kazi Aref Ahmed.
Revised:  Swadhin Bangal Biplobi Parishad was secretly organized in Dhaka University's Jahrul Hoque Hall by Mujibur Rahman under command of Sirajul Alam Khan (who was from the same university) along with Abdur Razzak and Kazi Aref Ahmed.
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Original:  The students of this league were recruited into the Mukti Bahini (Liberation Army), Mujibur Rahman's armed guerrilla force and the military arm of his political party the Bangladesh Awami League trained and commanded by India's external intelligence organization the Research and Analysis Wing to wage the liberation struggle.
Revised:  The students of this league were recruited into the Mukti Bahini (Liberation Army), Mujibur Rahman's armed guerrilla force and the military arm of his political party the Bangladesh Awami League trained by India's external intelligence organization the Research and Analysis Wing to wage the liberation struggle.
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Original:  The students of this league were recruited into the Mukti Bahini (Liberation Army), Mujibur Rahman's armed guerrilla force and the military arm of his political party the Bangladesh Awami League trained and commanded by India's external intelligence organization the Research and Analysis Wing to wage the liberation struggle.
Revised:  The students of this league were recruited into the Mukti Bahini (Liberation Army), Mujibur Rahman's armed guerrilla force and the military arm of his political party the Bangladesh Awami League trained and commanded by India's foreign intelligence organization the Research and Analysis Wing to wage the liberation struggle.
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