wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: File:2010 Crown Fire.jpg|250px|A large pyrocumulus cloud from the Crown Fire in Agua Dulce, California covers the skyline of much of the Southland Thursday evening ]] A huge wildfire that has been burning in the High Desert of Southern California since 2:00 pm (2200 UTC) yesterday continues to threaten residents in the city of Palmdale in the Antelope Valley region of the Los Angeles County this afternoon.
Revised: File:2010 Briggs Fire.jpg|250px|A large pyrocumulus cloud from the Crown Fire in Agua Dulce, California covers the skyline of much of the Southland Thursday evening ]] A huge wildfire that has been burning in the High Desert of Southern California since 2:00 pm (2200 UTC) yesterday continues to threaten residents in the city of Palmdale in the Antelope Valley region of the Los Angeles County this afternoon.
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Original: File:2010 Crown Fire.jpg|250px|A large pyrocumulus cloud from the Crown Fire in Agua Dulce, California covers the skyline of much of the Southland Thursday evening ]] A huge wildfire that has been burning in the High Desert of Southern California since 2:00 pm (2200 UTC) yesterday continues to threaten residents in the city of Palmdale in the Antelope Valley region of the Los Angeles County this afternoon.
Revised: File:2010 Crown Fire.jpg|250px|A large pyrocumulus cloud from the Briggs Fire covers the skyline of much of the Southland Thursday evening ]] A huge wildfire that has been burning in the High Desert of Southern California since 2:00 pm (2200 UTC) yesterday continues to threaten residents in the city of Palmdale in the Antelope Valley region of the Los Angeles County this afternoon.
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Original:  The death totals for Taliban fighters and Afghan civilians , have been harder to count
Revised:  The death totals for Taliban fighters and Afghan civilians have been harder to count
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Original:  However, in recet months, civilian casualties have been on the rise
Revised:  However, in recent months, civilian casualties have been on the rise
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Original: Three US troops have died in two separate blasts yesterday, bumping up the Afghanistan War American death toll  for July up to 63, and making this month the deadliest month for American involvement in the nine-year war.
Revised: Three US troops died in two separate blasts yesterday, bumping up the Afghanistan War American death toll for July up to 63, and making this month the deadliest month for American involvement in the nine-year war.
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Original: Three US troops have died in two separate blasts yesterday, bumping up the Afghanistan War American death toll  for July up to 63, and making this month the deadliest month for American involvement in the nine-year war.
Revised: Three US troops have died in two separate blasts yesterday, increasing the American death toll for July up to 63, and making this month the deadliest month for American involvement in the nine-year war.
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Original:  The death totals for Taliban fighters and Afghan civilians have been harder to count, although in recent months, civilian casualties have been on the rise  
Revised:  The death totals for Taliban fighters and Afghan civilians have been harder to count, although in recent months, civilian casualties have been on the rise . 
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Original:  Also, businesses and retailer 
Revised:  Also, businesses and retailers stocked shelves at a slower pace, and America's trade deficit, the largest in the world, widened as the country imported more goods. 
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Original: Economic growth in the US has slowed to 2.4\% in the second quarter as the economy struggles with high unemployment and the aftermath of the worst recession since the 1930's.
Revised: Economic growth in the USA has slowed to 2.4\% in the second quarter as the economy struggles with high unemployment and the aftermath of the worst recession since the 1930's.
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Original: In the second quarter of this year, the economy of the United States grew slower than expected.
Revised: In the second quarter of this year, the economy of the United States grew at a slower rate than expected.
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Original:  However, though economic growth has slowed for two straight quarters, it is much higher from the economy's low of -6.8\% in Q4 of 2008.
Revised:  However, although economic growth has slowed for two straight quarters, it is much higher from the economy's low of -6.8\% in Q4 of 2008.
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Original:  Nonresidential building investment rose for the first time in two years, and disposable personal incomes rose 4.4\%, though it appears that people aren't spending it
Revised:  Nonresidential building investment rose for the first time in two years, and disposable personal incomes rose 4.4\%, though it appears that people are not spending it
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Original:  The US Commerce Department also did some revising of economic growth statistics.
Revised:  The Commerce Department also did some revising of economic growth statistics.
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Original:  The US Commerce Department also did some revising of economic growth statistics.
Revised:  The US Commerce Department also revised some of their estimated economic growth statistics.
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Original:  The Department revised their estimate of Q1 economic growth from 2.7\% to 3.7\% . They also revised their estimate of the severity of the 2008-2009 recession from a real-GDP contraction of 2.5\% to an new figure of 2.8\%.
Revised:  The Department revised their estimate of Q1 economic growth from 2.7\% to 3.7\% , and also revised their estimate of the severity of the 2008-2009 recession from a real-GDP contraction of 2.5\% to an new figure of 2.8\%.
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Original:  However, although economic growth has slowed for two straight quarters, it is much higher from the economy's low of -6.8\% in Q4 of 2008.
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Original:  A similar incident in 2006 left 14 people dead and led to widespread unrest in the nation's capitol, Kabul.
Revised:  A similar incident in 2006 left fourteen people dead and led to widespread unrest in the nation's capitol, Kabul.
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Original:  Outside of Kabul, 6 U.S. soldiers were killed in Afghan attacks, bringing the July death toll for U.S. forces to 66, the deadliest month for American troops since the country was invaded almost 9 years ago
Revised:  Outside of Kabul, six U.S. soldiers were killed in Afghan attacks, bringing the July death toll for U.S. forces to 66, the deadliest month for American troops since the country was invaded almost 9 years ago
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Original:  Outside of Kabul, 6 U.S. soldiers were killed in Afghan attacks, bringing the July death toll for U.S. forces to 66, the deadliest month for American troops since the country was invaded almost 9 years ago
Revised:  Outside of Kabul, 6 U.S. soldiers were killed in Afghan attacks, bringing the July death toll for U.S. forces to 66, the deadliest month for American troops since the country was invaded almost nine years ago
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Original:  Security forces are concerned that the incident could lead to widespread rioting against the military occupation.
Revised:  Security forces say that the incident could lead to widespread rioting against the military occupation.
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Original:  A similar incident in  2006 left fourteen people dead and led to widespread unrest in the nation 's capitol , Kabul.
Revised:  A similar incident in 2006 sparked riots in Afghanistan 's capitol , Kabul.
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Original:  A similar incident in  2006 left fourteen people dead and led to widespread unrest in the nation 's capitol , Kabul.
Revised:  A similar incident in 2006 left fourteen people dead and led to widespread unrest in the nation 's capitol of Kabul.
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Original:  Outside of Kabul, six U.S. soldiers were killed in Afghan attacks, bringing the July death toll for U.S. forces to 66, the deadliest month for American troops since the country was invaded almost nine years ago
Revised:  Outside of Kabul, six U.S. soldiers were killed , increasing the death toll this month for US forces to 66, the deadliest month for American troops since the country was invaded almost nine years ago
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Original:  Security forces say that the incident could provoke widespread riots, as happened after a similar incident in May 2006 sparked riots in Afghanistan's capitol of Kabul.
Revised:  Security forces say that the incident could provoke widespread riots, as happened after a similar incident in May 2006 sparked riots in Kabul.
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Original:  Security forces say that the incident could provoke widespread riots, as happened after a similar incident in May 2006 sparked riots in Kabul .
Revised:  Security forces say that the incident could provoke widespread riots, as happened after a similar incident in May 2006 sparked riots in Kabul 
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Original:  In southern Afghanistan yesterday, six U.S. soldiers were killed, increasing the death toll this month for US forces to 66, the deadliest month for American troops since the country was invaded almost nine years ago
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Original:  Obama hopped into the car with assembly manager Teri Quigley, buckled his seat belt, and creeped forward about ten feet.
Revised:  Obama hopped into the car with assembly manager Teri Quigley, buckled his seat belt, and crept forward about ten feet.
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Original:  Obama hopped into the car with assembly manager Teri Quigley , buckled his seat belt, and crept forward about ten feet (three meters).
Revised:  Obama hopped into the car , buckled his seat belt, and crept forward about ten feet (three meters).
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Original: Officials say the bus was returning from the Dead Sea to the Jordanian capital of Ammam .
Revised: Officials say the bus was returning from the Dead Sea to the Jordanian capital of Amman .
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Original: A bus crash in Jordan killed two British women and four Iraqis late Thursday evening and injured the Iraqi minister of science and technology Raed Fahmy along with 27 others . Officials say the bus was returning from the Dead Sea to the Jordanian capital of Amman  .
Revised: On Thursday evening, a bus crash in Jordan killed two British women and four Iraqis late Thursday evening and injured the Iraqi minister of science and technology Raed Fahmy along with 27 others . Officials say the bus was returning from the Dead Sea to the Jordanian capital of Amman .
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Original: A bus crash in Jordan killed two British women and four Iraqis late Thursday evening and injured the Iraqi minister of science and technology Raed Fahmy along with 27 others . Officials say the bus was returning from the Dead Sea to the Jordanian capital of Amman  .
Revised: A bus crash in Jordan killed two British women and four Iraqis and injured 27 people, including the Iraqi minister of science and technology Raed Fahmy along with 27 others . Officials say the bus was returning from the Dead Sea to the Jordanian capital of Amman .
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Original: A bus crash in Jordan killed two British women and four Iraqis late Thursday evening and injured the Iraqi minister of science and technology Raed Fahmy along with 27 others . Officials say the bus was returning from the Dead Sea to the Jordanian capital of Amman  .
Revised: A bus crash in Jordan killed two British women and four Iraqis late Thursday evening and injured the Iraqi minister of science and technology Raed Fahmy . Officials say the bus was returning from the Dead Sea to the Jordanian capital of Amman .
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Original:  The bus overturned on a steep turn near the Dead Sea.
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Original:  Fahmy  is said to have broken his shoulder .
Revised:  Fahmy , who is said to have broken his shoulder .
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Original:  The British Embassy in Amman refused to give any more details of the crash victims
Revised:  The British Embassy in Amman refused to give any more details about the crash or its victims
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Original:  Hagerty said Gore pinned her down and "he kept trying to have sex with [ Hagerty ]."
Revised:  Hagerty said Gore pinned her down and "he kept trying to have sex with [ her ]."
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Original:  Former United States vice president Al Gore will not be facing assault charges filed by a masseuse in 2006, according to the Portland, Oregon district attorney's office.
Revised:  Former United States vice president Al Gore will not be facing assault charges due to allegations made by a masseuse in 2006, according to the Portland, Oregon district attorney's office.
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Original: Molly Hagerty, 54, claimed Gore " did sexually assault  me in his [hotel] room."
Revised: Molly Hagerty, 54, claimed Gore " sexually assault me in his [hotel] room."
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Original: Molly Hagerty, 54, claimed Gore " did sexually assault  me in his [hotel] room."
Revised: Molly Hagerty, 54, claimed Gore " did sexually assault ed me in his [hotel] room."
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Original:  Hagerty said Gore pinned her down and "he kept trying to have sex with [her]." Prosecutors closed the case, but after an interview of Hagerty by the tabloid National Inquirer  they reopened the case.
Revised:  Hagerty said Gore pinned her down and "he kept trying to have sex with [her]." Prosecutors closed the case, but after tabloid National Inquirer they reopened the case.
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Original:  Three French sport stars are among the dead after a helicopter crash in Villa Castelli , Argentina.
Revised:  Three French sport stars are among the dead after a in , Argentina.
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Original:  The victims were taking part in the French reality television show 'Dropped' when the accident happened.
Revised:  The victims were taking part in the French reality television show '' when the accident happened.
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Original:  The victims included Olympic swimmer Camille Muffat , Olympic boxer Alexis Vastine and Florence Arthaud , a yachtswoman.
Revised:  The victims included swimmer , Olympic boxer Alexis Vastine and Florence Arthaud , a yachtswoman.
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Original:  The victims included Olympic swimmer Camille Muffat , Olympic boxer Alexis Vastine and Florence Arthaud , a yachtswoman.
Revised:  The victims included Olympic swimmer Camille Muffat , Olympic boxer and , a yachtswoman.
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Original:  Cesar Angulo, Secretary of Security for La Rioja , the province in which the accident happened released an update.
Revised:  Cesar Angulo, Secretary of Security for , the province in which the accident happened released an update.
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Original:  Other contestants taking part included figure skater Philippe Candeloro, footballer Sylvain Wiltord, snowboarder Anne-Flore Marxer, swimmer swimmer Alain Bernard and Jeannie Longo ,  a cyclist.
Revised:  Other contestants taking part included figure skater , a cyclist.
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Original:  Other contestants taking part included figure skater Philippe Candeloro, footballer Sylvain Wiltord, snowboarder Anne-Flore Marxer, swimmer swimmer Alain Bernard and Jeannie Longo ,  a cyclist.
Revised:  Other contestants taking part included figure skater Philippe Candeloro, footballer Sylvain Wiltord, snowboarder Anne-Flore Marxer, swimmer swimmer Alain Bernard and Jeannie Longo , footballer , snowboarder , swimmer and , a cyclist.
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Original:  The show, which was to be shown on TF1 in France started filming in February.
Revised:  The show, which was to be shown on in France started filming in February.
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Original:  Muffat became the Olympic champion in the 400m freestyle event at the 2012 Summer Olympic Games in London, England.
Revised:  Muffat became the Olympic champion in the 400m freestyle event at the in London, England.
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Original:  He won a gold medal in the 2008 games in Beijing , China.
Revised:  He won a gold medal in the in , China.
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Original:  Arthaud, 57, was a yachtswoman who won the 1990 Route du Rhum
Revised:  Arthaud, 57, was a yachtswoman who won the 1990 
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Original:  10 people died after two helicopters collided mid-air on Monday, all passengers and both pilots died in the accident.
Revised:  Ten people died after two helicopters collided mid-air on Monday, all passengers and both pilots died in the accident.
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Original:  Bodies of all 10 of the victims have been retrieved and taken to the morgue.
Revised:  Bodies of all ten of the victims have been retrieved and taken to the morgue.
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Original:  Ten people died after two helicopters collided mid-air on Monday, all passengers and both pilots died in the accident .
Revised:  Ten people died after the crash, which involved two helicopters. The dead included all passengers and both pilots died in the accident .
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Original:  Ten people died after two helicopters collided mid-air on Monday, all passengers and both pilots died in the accident .
Revised:  Ten people died after two helicopters collided mid-air on Monday, all passengers and both pilots in the mid-air collision .
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Original:  The dead included all passengers and both pilots in the mid-air collision.
Revised:  The dead included passengers and both pilots in the mid-air collision.
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Original:  The victims were taking part in Dropped, a reality television show in which the contestants take part in survival style activities in remote locations.
Revised:  The television show involves contestants taking part in survival style activities in remote locations.
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Original:  Arthaud, 57, was a yachtswoman who won the 1990   
Revised:  Arthaud, 57, was a yachtswoman who won the 1990 . 
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Original:  He further said that "the items will be sent to  Germany or France since Pakistan doesn't have facilities to perform the analyses. "
Revised:  He further said that "the items will be sent to either Germany or France since Pakistan doesn't have facilities to perform the analyses. "
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Original: Turkish and Moroccan authorities arrested two suspects in are the believed creators of the Zotob and variant worms that took down CNN’s computer network and crippled other computers in the U.S. and worldwide earlier this month.
Revised: Turkish and Moroccan authorities arrested two suspects who are believed to be the creators of the Zotob and variant worms that took down CNN’s computer network and crippled other computers in the U.S. and worldwide earlier this month.
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Original: Turkish and Moroccan authorities arrested two suspects in are the believed creators of the Zotob and variant worms that took down CNN’s computer network and crippled other computers in the U.S. and worldwide earlier this month.
Revised: Turkish and Moroccan authorities arrested two suspects in are the believed creators of the Zotob worm that took down CNN’s computer network and crippled other computers in the U.S. and worldwide earlier this month.
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Original:  The recent release of the Zytob worm yielded more evidence of the perpetrators’ identities.
Revised:  The release of the Zytob worm yielded more evidence of the perpetrators’ identities.
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Original:  The Trojan backdoors these worms planted in the computers could have been used to provide remote access to the computer and  networks at a later date    .
Revised:  The Trojan backdoors these worms planted in the computers could have been used to provide remote access to the computer and their networks at a later date .
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Original:  The Trojan backdoors these worms planted in the computers could have been used to provide remote access to the computer and  networks at a later date    .
Revised:  The Trojan backdoors these worms planted in the computers could have been used to provide remote access to the computer and networks at a later date . .
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Original: The   5-year-old Windows 2000 operating system is most vulnerable to attack.
Revised: The The 5-year-old Windows 2000 operating system is most vulnerable to attack.
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Original:  XP SP2 users are not at risk .
Revised:  XP SP2 users are not at risk 
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Original: The Crown Fire that has burned  13,980 acres in the High Desert of Southern California since 2:32 pm (2232 UTC) Thursday is at 62\% containment this afternoon, according to the Los Angeles County Fire Department.
Revised: The Crown Fire that has burned through 13,980 acres in the High Desert of Southern California since 2:32 pm (2232 UTC) Thursday is at 62\% containment this afternoon, according to the Los Angeles County Fire Department.
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Original:  The roof of another house has been damaged, and car garages, horse stables, and other outbuildings have also been burned .
Revised:  The roof of another and burning car garages, horse stables, and other outbuildings have also been burned .
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Original:  The roof of another house has been damaged, and car garages, horse stables, and other outbuildings have also been burned .
Revised:  The roof of another house has been damaged, and car garages, horse stables, and other outbuildings .
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Original:  Most of the more seriously threatened homes were recently built from fire-proof materials, with walls coated in stucco, and fire-resistant plants in the yards.
Revised:  Most of the more seriously threatened homes were had been constructed recently from fire-proof materials, with walls coated in stucco, and fire-resistant plants in the yards.
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Original:  All existing evacuation orders were lifted late last night, but some roads are still closed to all traffic,  and 500 residents of Rancho Vista were told to "shelter in place" until further notice.
Revised:  Although some roads are still closed to all traffic, and 500 residents of Rancho Vista were told to "shelter in place" until further notice.
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Original:  All existing evacuation orders were lifted late last night, but some roads are still closed to all traffic,  and 500 residents of Rancho Vista were told to "shelter in place" until further notice.
Revised:  All existing evacuation orders were lifted late last night, but some roads are still closed to all traffic, all existing evacuation orders were lifted late last night and 500 residents of Rancho Vista were told to "shelter in place" until further notice.
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Original:  Two LACFD Fire Hawk helicopters protect one Antelope Valley home Throughout the night, firecrews have been battling the wildfire, assisted by cooler temperatures and lighter-than-expected winds which have enabled them to establish containment lines.
Revised:  Two LACFD Fire Hawk helicopters protect one Antelope Valley home Throughout the night, fire crews have been battling the wildfire, assisted by cooler temperatures and lighter-than-expected winds which have enabled them to establish containment lines.
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Original:  Three firefighters have been injured battling the fire, although all  are minor.
Revised:  Three firefighters have been injured battling the fire, although all injuries are minor.
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Original: The Crown Fire that has burned through 13,980 acres in the High Desert of Southern California since 2:32 pm (2232 UTC) Thursday is at 62\% containment this afternoon, according to the Los Angeles County Fire Department.
Revised: The Crown Fire that has burned through 13,980 acres in the High Desert of Southern California since 2:32 pm (2232 UTC) Thursday was at 62\% containment this afternoon, according to the Los Angeles County Fire Department.
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