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Original:  Norway's Police Security Service released a statement that said- It ] is important to emphasize that those groups in Norway that may constitute a threat to national security are small and primarily involved in support activities to foreign countries.
Revised:  Norway's Police Security Service released a statement that said- It i] is important to emphasize that those groups in Norway that may constitute a threat to national security are small and primarily involved in support activities to foreign countries.
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Original:  Norway's Police Security Service released a statement that said- It ] is important to emphasize that those groups in Norway that may constitute a threat to national security are small and primarily involved in support activities to foreign countries.
Revised:  Norway's Police Security Service released a statement that said- It ]t is important to emphasize that those groups in Norway that may constitute a threat to national security are small and primarily involved in support activities to foreign countries.
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Original: Three alledged al-Qaeda members have been arrested in Norway and Germany for suspected involvement in a bomb plot.
Revised: Three alleged al-Qaeda members have been arrested in Norway and Germany for suspected involvement in a bomb plot.
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Original:  The team that designed and built the aircraft believes that, in concept , the plane could fly indefinitely, given that there is enough sunlight to power it.
Revised:  The team that designed and built the aircraft believes that, in theory , the plane could fly indefinitely, given that there is enough sunlight to power it.
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Original:  However, the plane does have its setbacks , a blog on the project's website reported after seventeen hours of flight that "Andre's feeling great up there.
Revised:  However, the plane does have its setbacks ; a blog on the project's website reported after seventeen hours of flight that "Andre's feeling great up there.
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Original: An experimental solar-powered airplane,  the Solar Impulse, landed in Switzerland on Thursday after completing a successful 26-hour test flight.
Revised: An experimental solar-powered airplane, called the Solar Impulse, landed in Switzerland on Thursday after completing a successful 26-hour test flight.
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Original: An experimental solar-powered airplane , called the Solar Impulse , landed in Switzerland on Thursday after completing a successful 26-hour test flight.
Revised: The Solar Impulse, an experimental solar-powered airplane , called the Solar Impulse , landed in Switzerland on Thursday after completing a successful 26-hour test flight.
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Original: An experimental solar-powered airplane , called the Solar Impulse , landed in Switzerland on Thursday after completing a successful 26-hour test flight.
Revised: An experimental solar-powered airplane , landed in Switzerland on Thursday after completing a successful 26-hour test flight.
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Original: The plane can only carry one passenger, and contains 12,000 solar cells.
Revised: The plane can carry only one passenger, and contains 12,000 solar cells.
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Original: Early last year, Plusnet, an ISP with nearly 200,000 subscribers, cut it's prices for all of it's broadband products.
Revised: Early last year, Plusnet, an ISP with nearly 200,000 subscribers, cut its prices for all of it's broadband products.
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Original: Early last year, Plusnet, an ISP with nearly 200,000 subscribers, cut it's prices for all of it's broadband products.
Revised: Early last year, Plusnet, an ISP with nearly 200,000 subscribers, cut it's prices for all of its broadband products.
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Original:  In doing so, Plusnet allegedly did not to inform it's existing customers by e-mail, and instead published new products and prices on their public portal.
Revised:  In doing so, Plusnet allegedly did not to inform its existing customers by e-mail, and instead published new products and prices on their public portal.
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Original:  In doing so, Plusnet allegedly did not to inform its existing customers by e-mail, and instead published new products and prices on their public portal.
Revised:  In doing so, Plusnet allegedly did not inform its existing customers by e-mail, and instead published new products and prices on their public portal.
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Original:  Woverly 's claims so far are only speculative.
Revised: The accusations by Woverly, that customers are being over-charged, are considered speculative. Woverly 's claims so far are only speculative.
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Original:  Disgusted at the responses, Woverly continued to ask the same questions dozens of times on forum pages hoping to recieve some sort of satisfactory answer from Plusnet .
Revised:  Disgusted at the responses, Woverly continued to ask the same questions dozens of times on forum pages hoping to recieve some sort of answer from Plusnet .
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Original:  Disgusted at the responses, Woverly continued to ask the same questions dozens of times on forum pages hoping to recieve some sort of satisfactory answer from Plusnet .
Revised:  Disgusted at the responses, Woverly continued to ask the same questions dozens of times on forum pages hoping to recieve some sort of satisfactory answer from Plusnet 
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Original:  Woverly ultimately received a telephone call from Plusnet stating that if he didn't stop posting comments on their forums, they would terminate his entire ADSL internet connection and forum access.
Revised:  that he considered satisfactory. Ultimately, he claimed that he received a telephone call from Plusnet stating that if he didn't stop posting comments on their forums, they would terminate his entire ADSL internet connection and forum access.
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Original:  Woverly ultimately received a telephone call from Plusnet stating that if he didn't stop posting comments on their forums, they would terminate his entire ADSL internet connection and forum access.
Revised:  Woverly ultimately received a telephone call from the ISP where he was informed that if he didn't stop posting comments on their forums, they would terminate his entire ADSL internet connection and forum access.
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Original:  Woverly ultimately received a telephone call from Plusnet stating that if he didn't stop posting comments on their forums, they would terminate his entire ADSL internet connection and forum access.
Revised:  Woverly ultimately received a telephone call from Plusnet stating that if he didn't stop posting comments on their forums, they would terminate his ADSL internet connection and forum access.
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Original:  Neil Armstrong,  Head of Marketing at Plusnet, commented, "Our comms team is there to serve all our customers, not to be drained by one unreasonably demanding customer."
Revised:  Neil Armstrong, the Head of Marketing at Plusnet, commented, "Our comms team is there to serve all our customers, not to be drained by one unreasonably demanding customer."
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Original:  As a result, the ISP has begun receiving numbers of customer complaints and critisism both privately and through their publicly accessible member discussion forums.
Revised:  As a result, the ISP has begun receiving numbers of customer complaints and criticism both privately and through their publicly accessible member discussion forums.
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Original: After a night of lengthly posts both on Plusnet boards and at the forums at ADSLGuide, a Customer Services Manager at Plusnet, Carol Axe, allegedly contacted Woverly to inform him that they would be terminating his service, and that he has 30 days to migrate away until his line will be disconnected.
Revised: After a night of lengthy posts both on Plusnet boards and at the forums at ADSLGuide, a Customer Services Manager at Plusnet, Carol Axe, allegedly contacted Woverly to inform him that they would be terminating his service, and that he has 30 days to migrate away until his line will be disconnected.
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Original:  They still haven't named it, though .
Revised:  However, they have yet to name the child .
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Original: According to a New York Times blog, after Parisa Khosravi, the CNN senior vice president, "had a conversation" with Ms  Nasr she was formally asked to step down.
Revised: According to a New York Times blog, after Parisa Khosravi, the CNN senior vice president, "had a conversation" with Ms . Nasr she was formally asked to step down.
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Original: Atlanta-based CNN journalist Octavia Nasr, 20-year veteran of the network and senior editor for Middle East affairs, was reprimanded for a Twitter comment published on Sunday in which she expressed sadness at the death of Iraqi-born Lebanese Grand Ayatollah Mohammad Hussein Fadlallah , saying that she was "Sad to hear of the passing of Sayyed Mohammad Hussein Fadlallah..
Revised: Atlanta-based CNN journalist Octavia Nasr, 20-year veteran of the network and senior editor for Middle East affairs, was reprimanded for a Twitter comment published on Sunday in which she expressed sadness at the death of Iraqi-born Lebanese Grand Ayatollah Mohammad Hussein Fadlallah . In the post, the journalist stated that she was "Sad to hear of the passing of Sayyed Mohammad Hussein Fadlallah..
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Original:  He is thought to be the target of a 1985 car bombing in Beirut, which killed 80 people but not the Ayatollah himself , alleged to have been "the work of the CIA, possibly in conjunction with regional intelligence agencies friendly to the US", according to the BBC
Revised:  He is thought to have been the target of a 1985 car bombing in Beirut, which killed 80 people but not the Ayatollah himself , alleged to have been "the work of the CIA, possibly in conjunction with regional intelligence agencies friendly to the US", according to the BBC
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Original:  He is thought to be the target of a 1985 car bombing in Beirut, which killed 80 people but not the Ayatollah himself , alleged to have been "the work of the CIA, possibly in conjunction with regional intelligence agencies friendly to the US", according to the BBC
Revised:  He is thought to be the target of a 1985 car bombing in Beirut, which killed 80 people but not the Ayatollah himself . The BBC reports it may have been "the work of the CIA, possibly in conjunction with regional intelligence agencies friendly to the US", according to the BBC
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Original: One of the lawyers for the nearly 32,000 plaintiffs Timothy Needham claimed inadequate staffing levels put SH's patients at risk.
Revised: One of the lawyers for the nearly 32,000 plaintiffs , Timothy Needham, claimed that inadequate staffing levels put SH's patients at risk.
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Original:  After the verdict was issued, Skilled Healthcare stocks plunged over 75\% to a record low for the nursing home operator .
Revised:  After the verdict was issued, Skilled Healthcare stocks plunged over 75\% to a record low for the .
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Original: The swap reportedly began late Thursday, with Russia beginning the process of releasing at least  of the prisoners they held, Igor Sutyagin, almost immediately.
Revised: The swap reportedly began late Thursday, with Russia beginning the process of releasing at least one of the prisoners they held, Igor Sutyagin, almost immediately.
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Original:  Below are the Russian spies who were convicted (cover names are in quotes, while real names are unquoted)  The US arrested the ten spies that are to be returned to Russia as part of its breakup of a long-term spy ring that had operated for years, and involved the spies living as American civilians, some as couples.
Revised:  Below are the Russian spies who were convicted (cover names are in quotes, while real names are unquoted) : The US arrested the ten spies that are to be returned to Russia as part of its breakup of a long-term spy ring that had operated for years, and involved the spies living as American civilians, some as couples.
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Original:  Prosecutors say that they had been commanded by Russia's Foreign Intelligence Service, with the mission of collecting information about American policy  
Revised:  Prosecutors say that they had been commanded by Russia's Foreign Intelligence Service, with the mission of collecting information about American policy . 
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Original: Seal of the SVR, the Russian Foreign Intelligence Agency The United States and Russia today agreed to the swap of prisoners held by both nations after eleven Russian spies were arrested late last month.
Revised: Seal of the SVR, the Russian Foreign Intelligence Agency The United States and Russia yesterday agreed to the swap of prisoners held by both nations after eleven Russian spies were arrested late last month.
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Original:  The spies arrested by the US all pleaded guilty to charges of "conspiracy to act as an unregistered agent of a foreign country."
Revised:  The spies arrested by the US all pled guilty to charges of "conspiracy to act as an unregistered agent of a foreign country."
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Original: File: File: LeBron James 1.jpg|File photo of LeBron James.
Revised: File: LeBron James 1.jpg|File photo of LeBron James.
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Original:  Prior to the announcement, amid rumors that James would sign with the Heat, Heat season tickets had sold out  
Revised:  Prior to the announcement, amid rumors that James would sign with the Heat, Heat season tickets had sold out . 
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Original:  Accoring to the North Korean government, American Aijali Mahli Gomes  attempted suicide in a North Korean prison.
Revised:  According to the North Korean government, American Aijali Mahli Gomes attempted suicide in a North Korean prison.
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Original:  Accoring to the North Korean government, American Aijali Mahli Gomes  attempted suicide in a North Korean prison.
Revised:  Accoring to the North Korean government, US man Aijali Mahli Gomes attempted suicide in a North Korean prison.
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Original:  Accoring to the North Korean government, American Aijali Mahli Gomes  attempted suicide in a North Korean prison.
Revised:  Accoring to the North Korean government, American Aijali Mahli Gomes has attempted suicide in a North Korean prison.
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Original:  Since April , Gomes has been sentenced to eight years of hard labour for illegally attempting to cross into the reclusive country in January, though his reasons for doing so were unclear.
Revised:  In April Gomes was sentenced to eight years of hard labour for illegally attempting to cross into the reclusive country in January, though his reasons for doing so were unclear.
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Original:  Since April , Gomes has been sentenced to eight years of hard labour for illegally attempting to cross into the reclusive country in January, though his reasons for doing so were unclear.
Revised:  Since April , Gomes has been sentenced to eight years of hard labour for illegally attempting to cross into the reclusive country in January, though his reasons for doing so remain unclear.
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Original:  In addition to the harsh prison term, the American was also fined  $700,000 for a "hostile act".
Revised:  In addition to the prison term, the American was also fined $700,000 for a "hostile act".
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Original:  In addition to the harsh prison term, the American was also fined  $700,000 for a "hostile act".
Revised:  In addition to the harsh prison term, the man was also fined $700,000 for a "hostile act".
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Original:  In addition to the harsh prison term, the American was also fined  $700,000 for a "hostile act".
Revised:  In addition to the harsh prison term, the American was also fined the equivalent of US $700,000 for a "hostile act".
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Original:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding, " He  was given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
Revised:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding, " h was given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
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Original:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding, " He  was given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
Revised:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding, " He e was given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
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Original:  Gomes has been described as a faithful Christian by colleagues, and before trying to cross into the North, he was an English teacher in South Korea  . Gomes had also attended rallies that supported human rights activist Robert Park, who is also Christian and crossed into the North to protest the Communist country's poor human-rights record.
Revised:  Gomes was an English teacher in South Korea . Gomes had also attended rallies that supported human rights activist Robert Park, who is also Christian and crossed into the North to protest the Communist country's poor human-rights record.
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Original:  Gomes has been described as a faithful Christian by colleagues, and before trying to cross into the North, he was an English teacher in South Korea  . Gomes had also attended rallies that supported human rights activist Robert Park, who is also Christian and crossed into the North to protest the Communist country's poor human-rights record.
Revised:  Gomes has been described as a faithful Christian by colleagues, and before trying to cross into the North, he was an English teacher in South Korea . Gomes had also attended rallies that supported human rights activist Robert Park, who crossed into the North to protest the Communist country's poor human-rights record.
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Original:  Gomes has been described as a faithful Christian by colleagues, and before trying to cross into the North, he was an English teacher in South Korea  . Gomes had also attended rallies that supported human rights activist Robert Park, who is also Christian and crossed into the North to protest the Communist country's poor human-rights record.
Revised:  Gomes has been described as a faithful Christian by colleagues, and before trying to cross into the North, he was an English teacher in South Korea . Gomes had also attended rallies that supported human rights activist Robert Park, who is also Christian and crossed into the North to protest the Communist country's poor human rights record.
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Original:  According to the North Korean government, US man Aijali Mahli Gomes  has attempted suicide in a North Korean prison.
Revised:  According to the North Korean government, US man Aijali Mahli Gomes , has attempted suicide in a North Korean prison.
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Original:  In April  Gomes was sentenced to eight years of hard labour for illegally attempting to cross into the reclusive country in January, though his reasons for doing so remain unclear.
Revised:  In April , Gomes was sentenced to eight years of hard labour for illegally attempting to cross into the reclusive country in January, though his reasons for doing so remain unclear.
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Original:  Tension still runs high in North Korea after the recent sinking of the South Korean Cheonan warship , and this report was given just hours before the United Nations Security Council was expected to pass a resolution censuring the explosion of the Cheonan.
Revised:  Tension still runs high in North Korea after the sinking of the South Korean Cheonan warship , and this report was given just hours before the United Nations Security Council was expected to pass a resolution censuring the explosion of the Cheonan.
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Original:  Tension still runs high in North Korea after the recent sinking of the South Korean Cheonan warship , and this report was given just hours before the United Nations Security Council was expected to pass a resolution censuring the explosion of the Cheonan.
Revised:  Tension still runs high in North Korea after the recent sinking of the South Korean warship Cheonan , and this report was given just hours before the United Nations Security Council was expected to pass a resolution censuring the explosion of the Cheonan.
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Original:  North Korea has denied any involvement in the sinking of the warship and has declared that any sanctions from the international community means war
Revised:  North Korea has denied any involvement in the sinking of the warship and has declared that any sanctions from the international community will lead to war
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Original:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding , "  [ h ] e was given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy  have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
Revised:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding that Gomes " [ h ] e was given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
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Original:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding , "  [ h ] e was given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy  have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
Revised:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding , " [ being ] e was given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
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Original:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding , "  [ h ] e was given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy  have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
Revised:  This report did not specify where and how Gomes attempted suicide, or his state at present, only adding , " [ h ] given first-aid treatment at a hospital", and that Swedish diplomats at their Pyongyang embassy have been made aware of Gomes' condition.
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Original: Tension still runs high in North Korea after the sinking of the South Korean warship Cheonan, and this report was given just hours before the United Nations Security Council was expected to pass a resolution censuring the explosion of the Cheonan.
Revised: North Korea's international relations remain tense after the sinking of the South Korean warship Cheonan, and this report was given just hours before the United Nations Security Council was expected to pass a resolution censuring the explosion of the Cheonan.
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Original: Tension still runs high in North Korea after the sinking of the South Korean warship Cheonan, and this report was given just hours before the United Nations Security Council was expected to pass a resolution censuring the explosion of the Cheonan.
Revised: Tension still runs high in North Korea after the sinking of the South Korean warship Cheonan, and this report was issued just hours before the United Nations Security Council was expected to pass a resolution censuring the explosion of the Cheonan.
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Original: 250px|The North Korean government has reported that an American prisoner, Aijali Mahli Gomes, has "attempted suicide".
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