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Original:  He has agreed to testify before Congress about the legalityof intelligence programs run by both the Department of Defense and the National Security Agency that they say are an effort to monitor the activities of terrorists .
Revised:  He has agreed to testify before Congress about their legality .
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Original: Guatemala wants to nominate nobel peace prize winning indigenous rights worker Rigoberta Menchú, 46, to become the next Secretary General of the Organisation of American States (OAS).
Revised: Guatemala has nominated a Nobel Peace Prize winner, indigenous rights worker Rigoberta Menchú, 46, to become the next Secretary General of the Organisation of American States (OAS).
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Original: Guatemala wants to nominate nobel peace prize winning indigenous rights worker Rigoberta Menchú, 46, to become the next Secretary General of the Organisation of American States (OAS).
Revised: Guatemala wants to nominate nobel peace prize winning indigenous rights worker Rigoberta Menchú, 46, to become the next Secretary General of the Organization of American States (OAS).
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Original:  This post has become available after the previous occupant Miguel Ángel Rodriguez only served 24 days  before returning home to Costa Rica in order to face corruption charges.
Revised:  The post became available after the previous occupant Miguel Ángel Rodriguez only served 24 days before returning home to Costa Rica in order to face corruption charges.
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Original:  This post has become available after the previous occupant Miguel Ángel Rodriguez only served 24 days  before returning home to Costa Rica in order to face corruption charges.
Revised:  This post has become available after the previous occupant Miguel Ángel Rodriguez , served for only 24 days before returning home to Costa Rica in order to face corruption charges.
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Original:  This post has become available after the previous occupant Miguel Ángel Rodriguez only served 24 days  before returning home to Costa Rica in order to face corruption charges.
Revised:  This post has become available after the previous occupant Miguel Ángel Rodriguez only served 24 days before returning home to Costa Rica to face corruption charges.
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Original:  Yet after the scandal with Rodriguez the Central American states have been unable to find another candidate in whom they are all agreed.
Revised:  But the Rodriguez scandal has made it difficult for the Central American states have been unable to find another candidate in whom they are all agreed.
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Original:  Yet after the scandal with Rodriguez the Central American states have been unable to find another candidate in whom they are all agreed.
Revised:  Yet after the scandal with Rodriguez the Central American states to find another candidate in whom they are all agreed.
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Original:  President Oscar Berger of Guatemala wants Menchú to become the central american candidate.
Revised:  President Oscar Berger of Guatemala agrees that Menchú to become the central american candidate.
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Original:  She has said that if the Central American nations are in agreement  she will happily stand as a candidate.
Revised:  She has said that if the Central American nations are in agreement , she will happily stand as a candidate.
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Original:  She has said that if the Central American nations are in agreement  she will happily stand as a candidate.
Revised:  She has said that if the Central American nations are in agreement she will happily stand as their candidate.
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Original:  An indigenous Guatemalan, she won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1992, and was also prominent in her opposition to the previous FRG government that Berger defeated.
Revised:  An indigenous Guatemalan, she won the Nobel Peace Prize in 1992, and was also prominent in her opposition to the previous FRG government which Berger defeated.
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Original:  She  works for the current government as Good Will Ambassador for the 1996 peace accord.
Revised:  works for the current government as Good Will Ambassador for the 1996 peace accord.
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Original:  Fire engines were sent to Oxford Circus and Piccadilly Circus
Revised:  Fire services were sent to Oxford Circus and Piccadilly Circus
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Original:  Fire services were sent to Oxford Circus , Piccadilly Circusand Trafalgar Square
Revised:  Fire services were sent to Oxford Circus and Piccadilly Circus
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Original: Location map of the Ukraine Ukraine Parliament voted oust the Prime Minister and his cabinet Tuesday after the handling of the countries gas crisis with Russia last week.
Revised:  Ukraine Parliament voted oust the Prime Minister and his cabinet Tuesday after the handling of the countries gas crisis with Russia last week.
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Original: Location map of the Ukraine Ukraine Parliament voted oust the Prime Minister and his cabinet Tuesday after the handling of the countries gas crisis with Russia last week.
Revised: Location map of the Ukraine The Ukrainian Parliament voted to oust the Prime Minister and his cabinet Tuesday after the handling of the countries gas crisis with Russia last week.
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Original: It is expected, however, that the governemnt will remain in place until parliamentary elections are held, which are scheduled to occur in March.
Revised: It is expected, however, that the government will remain in place until parliamentary elections are held, which are scheduled to occur in March.
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Original:  Last week Moscow agreed to a new contract, which Ukraine would pay nearly two time the amount it did before.
Revised:  Last week Moscow agreed to a new contract, which Ukraine would pay nearly two times the amount it did before.
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Original:  Many Unkranians have been sent to hospital with Russian gas deal injuries.
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Original:  STARDUST , a NASA space capsule carrying precious comet samples from deep space, is scheduled to return to earth January 15, 2006.
Revised:  Stardust , a NASA space capsule carrying precious comet samples from deep space, is scheduled to return to earth January 15, 2006.
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Original:  Its journey will have lasted a total of just over 7 years when it lands in the Utah dessert .
Revised:  Its journey will have lasted a total of just over 7 years when it lands in the Utah desert .
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Original:  The show will be quick, but should provide viewers with quite a light show .
Revised:  The show will be quick, but should prove impressive .
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Original:  It is the first time since 1972 that any extraterrestrial solid material has been collected and brought back to Earth, and the first time ever for comet particles.
Revised:  It is the first time since 1972 that any solid extraterrestrial material has been collected and brought back to Earth, and the first time ever for comet particles.
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Original:  Comets are thought to be leftovers from the process of planet formation, and scientists said the dust collected by Stardust will give them their first opportunity to study pristine samples of materials formed billions of years ago.
Revised:  Comets are thought to be remnants from the process of planet formation, and scientists said the dust collected by Stardust will give them their first opportunity to study pristine samples of materials formed billions of years ago.
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Original:  "We will learn a phenomenal amount  ... from the most primitive materials in our solar system.
Revised:  "We will learn a phenomenal amount . ... from the most primitive materials in our solar system.
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Original:  It is the first time since 1972 that any solid extraterrestrial material has been collected and brought back to Earth, and the first time ever for comet particles.
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Original:  "We will learn a phenomenal amount .... from the most primitive materials in our solar system.
Revised:  "We will learn a phenomenal amount … from the most primitive materials in our solar system.
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Original: Stardust, a NASA space capsule carrying precious comet samples from deep space, is scheduled to return to earth January 15, 2006.
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Original:  Scientists hope to discover new meaning to the begining of our solar system.
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Original:  Now, near the end of its long voyage home, the probe is set to plunge back to Earth in the predawn hours on Sunday  
Revised:  Now, near the end of its long voyage home, the probe is set to plunge back to Earth in the predawn hours on Sunday . 
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Original:  Other proposals include improved information sharing and increased resources available to monitor convicts  
Revised:  Other proposals include improved information sharing and increased resources available to monitor convicts . 
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Original:  It also raised concerns that Smith's side of the story, which contained a denial, was given "plausibility" by the risk assessment and this  "distracted" police officers responsible for dealing with him.
Revised:  It also raised concerns that Smith's side of the story, which contained a denial, was given "plausibility" by the risk assessment and this may have "distracted" police officers responsible for dealing with him.
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Original:  It found police found it difficult to monitor him, and the force's offender management unit was generally poor with little oversight from management.
Revised:  It found police found it difficult to monitor him, and the force's offender management unit had little oversight from management.
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Original: A 7-year old boy, in Tennessee , who was eager to get his driver's liscense , decided to take his parents pick-up truck for a joyride.
Revised: A 7-year old Tennessee boy who was eager to get his driver's liscense , decided to take his parents pick-up truck for a joyride.
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Original:  The boy, whos name was not released, remembered to use his seatbelt and even  his turn signal when he was supposed to.
Revised:  The boy, who's name was not released, remembered to use his seatbelt and even his turn signal when he was supposed to.
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Original:  The boy, whos name was not released, remembered to use his seatbelt and even  his turn signal when he was supposed to.
Revised:  The boy, whos name was not released, remembered to wear his seatbelt and even his turn signal when he was supposed to.
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Original:  The boy, whos name was not released, remembered to use his seatbelt and even  his turn signal when he was supposed to.
Revised:  The boy, whos name was not released, remembered to use his seatbelt and even use his turn signal when he was supposed to.
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Original:  "He was weaving and all over the road.
Revised:  "He was weaving all over the road.
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Original:  The boy was charged with driving without a license, eluding police , and leaving the scene of an accident.
Revised:  The boy was charged with driving without a license, eluding police and leaving the scene of an accident.
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Original:  Source: Washington Post (subscription), Reuters Pope addresses diplomatic corps saying "challenges of life" is the main issue Pope John Paul II, speaking from the Vatican City spoke out on a host of social issues including abortion, cloning, gay marriage, assisted procreation and the use of embryonic stem cells Source:
Revised:  Source: Reuters Pope addresses diplomatic corps saying "challenges of life" is the main issue Pope John Paul II, speaking from the Vatican City spoke out on a host of social issues including abortion, cloning, gay marriage, assisted procreation and the use of embryonic stem cells Source:
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Original: Ukraine may pull troops out of Iraq One day after eight of its soldiers were killed in an Iraqi blast, Ukraine's new government may decide to withdraw all troops from peacekeeping duty in Iraq . Source: Reuters Pope addresses diplomatic corps saying 'challenges of life' is the main issue Pope John Paul II, speaking from the Vatican City spoke out on a host of social issues including abortion, cloning, same-sex marriage, assisted procreation and the use of embryonic stem cells.
Revised: Ukraine may pull troops out of Iraq One day after eight of its soldiers were killed in an Iraqi blast, Ukraine's new government may decide to withdraw all troops from peacekeeping duty in Iraq Pope addresses diplomatic corps saying 'challenges of life' is the main issue Pope John Paul II, speaking from the Vatican City spoke out on a host of social issues including abortion, cloning, same-sex marriage, assisted procreation and the use of embryonic stem cells.
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Original: Agca , shot the Pope in St . Peter's Sqaure who riding in a open-topped car.
Revised: Agca shot the Pope in St . Peter's Sqaure who riding in a open-topped car.
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Original: Agca , shot the Pope in St . Peter's Sqaure who riding in a open-topped car.
Revised: Agca , shot the Pope as he rode around St Peter's Sqaure who riding in a open-topped car.
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Original: Agca , shot the Pope in St . Peter's Sqaure who riding in a open-topped car.
Revised: Agca , shot the Pope in St . Peter's Square in a open-topped car.
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Original:  Agca was sentenced to life in prison in Italy, before being paronded in 2000 and extradited to Turkey to serve jail time for muder of Abdi Ipekci, a journalist.
Revised:  Agca was sentenced to life in prison in Italy, before being pardoned in 2000 and extradited to Turkey to serve jail time for muder of Abdi Ipekci, a journalist.
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Original:  Agca was sentenced to life in prison in Italy, before being paronded in 2000 and extradited to Turkey to serve jail time for muder of Abdi Ipekci, a journalist.
Revised:  Agca was sentenced to life in prison in Italy, before being paronded in 2000 and extradited to Turkey to serve jail time for the murder of Abdi Ipekci, a journalist.
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Original:  Agca was a Turkish militant who  a member of the nationalist Grey Wolves;
Revised:  Agca was a Turkish militant who was a member of the nationalist Grey Wolves;
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Original:  Turkish citizens were outraged that he served only four and a half years for attempted murder
Revised:  Turkish citizens were outraged that he served only four and a half years for murder
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Original:  A Turkish court had determined that he had already completed his sentence with time already served.
Revised:  A Turkish court had determined that he had already completed his sentence with time served.
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Original: Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, a top US commander who supervised  detention and interrogation of detainees at Guantanomo Bay and Abu Ghraib detention facilities declined testifying in a in court-martial proceeding , invoking his right to not implicate himself, the Washington Post reports.
Revised: Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, a top US commander who supervised the detention and interrogation of detainees at Guantanomo Bay and Abu Ghraib detention facilities declined testifying in a in court-martial proceeding , invoking his right to not implicate himself, the Washington Post reports.
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Original: Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, a top US commander who supervised  detention and interrogation of detainees at Guantanomo Bay and Abu Ghraib detention facilities declined testifying in a in court-martial proceeding , invoking his right to not implicate himself, the Washington Post reports.
Revised: Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, a top US commander who supervised detention and interrogation of detainees at Guantanomo Bay and Abu Ghraib facilities declined to testify in a court-martial proceeding , invoking his right to not implicate himself, the Washington Post reports.
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Original: Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, a top US commander who supervised  detention and interrogation of detainees at Guantanomo Bay and Abu Ghraib detention facilities declined testifying in a in court-martial proceeding , invoking his right to not implicate himself, the Washington Post reports.
Revised: Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, a top US commander who supervised detention and interrogation of detainees at Guantanomo Bay and Abu Ghraib detention facilities declined testifying in a in court-martial proceeding by invoking his right to not implicate himself, the Washington Post reports.
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Original:  Gen. Miller declined to testify in the court-martial of two dog-handlers who are accused of detainee abuse.
Revised:  Gen. Miller declined to testify during the court-martial of two dog-handlers who are accused of detainee abuse.
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Original:  Gen. Miller declined to testify in the court-martial of two dog-handlers who are accused of detainee abuse.
Revised:  Gen. Miller declined to testify in the court-martial trial involving two dog-handlers who are accused of detainee abuse.
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Original:  Gen. Miller's lawyer has stated that the decision to decline testifying has been taken as Miller has been repeatedly interviewed over the last several years  and that he stands by his statements to Congress, Army Investigators and lawyers
Revised:  Gen. Miller's lawyer has stated that the decision to decline testifying was taken as Miller has been repeatedly interviewed over the last several years and that he stands by his statements to Congress, Army Investigators and lawyers
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Original:  Gen. Miller's lawyer has stated that the decision to decline testifying has been taken as Miller has been repeatedly interviewed over the last several years  and that he stands by his statements to Congress, Army Investigators and lawyers
Revised:  Gen. Miller's lawyer has stated that the decision to decline testifying has been taken as Miller has been repeatedly interviewed over the last several years , and that he stands by his statements to Congress, Army Investigators and lawyers
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Original: Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, a top US commander who supervised the detention and interrogation of detainees at Guantanomo Bay and Abu Ghraib facilities declined to testify in a court-martial proceeding  by invoking his right to not implicate himself, the Washington Post reports.
Revised: Maj. Gen. Geoffrey Miller, a top US commander who supervised the detention and interrogation of detainees at Guantanomo Bay and Abu Ghraib facilities declined to testify in a court-martial proceeding , by invoking his right to not implicate himself, the Washington Post reports.
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Original:  An attorney for one of the accused is seeking to question Miller on whether he ordered the the use of dogs to frighten detainees during interrogations.
Revised:  An attorney for one of the accused is seeking to question Miller on whether he ordered the use of dogs to frighten detainees during interrogations.
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Original:  One thing Muslims are required to make a pilgrimage to Mecca during the lifetime, if they are physically or financially possible to  . Saudi officials had already replaced the pillar before this event happened with a oval wall with padded edges to protect pilgrams from a crush, even more they installed security cameras and placed  Last week, at least 76 people were killed when a hotel near the Masjid Al Haram  collasped, the cause of which is unknown.
Revised:  Muslims are required to make a pilgrimage to Mecca during the lifetime, if they are physically or financially possible to . Saudi officials had already replaced the pillar before this event happened with a oval wall with padded edges to protect pilgrams from a crush, even more they installed security cameras and placed Last week, at least 76 people were killed when a hotel near the Masjid Al Haram collasped, the cause of which is unknown.
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Original: 220px|The Plains of Arafat on the day of Hajj Photo Credit: Ali Mansuri According to the Saudi Interior Ministry over 345 Muslim pilgrams have been killed in a stampede during the annual Hajj pilgrimage near Meeca  .
Revised: 220px|The Plains of Arafat on the day of Hajj Photo Credit: Ali Mansuri According to the Saudi Interior Ministry over 345 Muslim pilgrims have been killed in a stampede during the annual Hajj pilgrimage near Meeca .
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Original: 220px|The Plains of Arafat on the day of Hajj Photo Credit: Ali Mansuri According to the Saudi Interior Ministry over 345 Muslim pilgrams have been killed in a stampede during the annual Hajj pilgrimage near Meeca  .
Revised: 220px|The Plains of Arafat on the day of Hajj Photo Credit: Ali Mansuri According to the Saudi Interior Ministry over 345 Muslim pilgrams have been killed in a stampede during the annual Hajj pilgrimage near Meeca , Saudi Arabia .
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Original:  The stampede  happened at Jamarat Bridge , near Mecca in Saudi Arabia, during an event were pebbles were thrown at a pillar, representing the stoning of Satan as part of the final rites of the Hajj.
Revised:  The stampede happened at Jamarat Bridge during an event were pebbles were thrown at a pillar, representing the stoning of Satan as part of the final rites of the Hajj.
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Original:  The stampede  happened at Jamarat Bridge , near Mecca in Saudi Arabia, during an event were pebbles were thrown at a pillar, representing the stoning of Satan as part of the final rites of the Hajj.
Revised:  The stampede happened at Jamarat Bridge , near Mecca in Saudi Arabia, during an event were pebbles are thrown at a pillar, representing the stoning of Satan as part of the final rites of the Hajj.
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Original:  The stampede began when luggage from a bus tripped pilgrims at the eastern end of the wall  causing a bottleneck.
Revised:  The stampede began when luggage from a bus tripped pilgrims at the eastern end of the wall , causing a bottleneck.
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Original:  Muslims are required to make a pilgrimage to Mecca during the lifetime, if they are physically or financially possible to as it one of the five pillars of the Islamic faith.
Revised:  Muslims are required to make a pilgrimage to Mecca during the lifetime, if physically or financially possible to as it one of the five pillars of the Islamic faith.
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Original:  Muslims are required to make a pilgrimage to Mecca during the lifetime, if they are physically or financially possible to as it one of the five pillars of the Islamic faith.
Revised:  Muslims are required to make a pilgrimage to Mecca during the lifetime, if they are physically or financially possible , as it one of the five pillars of the Islamic faith.
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Original:  Saudi officials had already replaced the pillar before this event happened with a oval wall with padded edges to protect pilgrams from a crush, even more they installed security cameras and placed over 60,000 security personnel in the area.
Revised:  Saudi officials had already provided safeguards by installing an oval wall with padded edges to protect pilgrams from a crush, even more they installed security cameras and placed over 60,000 security personnel in the area.
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Original:  Saudi officials had already replaced the pillar before this event happened with a oval wall with padded edges to protect pilgrams from a crush, even more they installed security cameras and placed over 60,000 security personnel in the area.
Revised:  Saudi officials had already replaced the pillar before this event happened with a oval wall with padded edges to protect pilgrams from a crush, installed security cameras and placed over 60,000 security personnel in the area.
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