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Original:  The official newspaper of the government of China claimed that "the Dalai Lama is scheming to take the Beijing Olympics hostage to force the Chinese government to make concessions to Tibet independence   
Revised:  The official newspaper of the government of China claimed that "the Dalai Lama is scheming to take the Beijing Olympics hostage to force the Chinese government to make concessions to Tibet independence ." 
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Original:  United States Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice said on Monday, "We have really urged the Chinese over several years to find a way to talk with the Dalai Lama, who is a figure of authority, who is not a separatist, and to find a way to engage him and bring his moral weight to a more sustainable and better solution of the Tibet issue 
Revised:  United States Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice said on Monday, "We have really urged the Chinese over several years to find a way to talk with the Dalai Lama, who is a figure of authority, who is not a separatist, and to find a way to engage him and bring his moral weight to a more sustainable and better solution of the Tibet issue .
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Original: The government of China has claimed that the Dalia Lama is cooperating with Islamic extremists as part of a plot to bring the country into crises before the Olympic Games, which are due to be half in Beijing this Summer.
Revised: The government of China has claimed that the Dalai Lama is cooperating with Islamic extremists as part of a plot to bring the country into crises before the Olympic Games, which are due to be half in Beijing this Summer.
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Original:  Image:Tenzin Gyatzo foto 1.jpg|Tenzin Gyatso, the 14th Dalai Lama This move comes after Tenzin Gyatso, the 14th Dalai Lama, vowed to step down from his position if things "get out of control" in Tibet, where violent demonstrations against China have killed anywhere from 13 to 100 people.
Revised:  This move comes after Tenzin Gyatso, the 14th Dalai Lama, vowed to step down from his position if things "get out of control" in Tibet, where violent demonstrations against China have killed anywhere from 13 to 100 people.
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Original:  Shankaracharya remanded to 5-day police custody Deccan Herald%DIFDELCMD < & %%% PTI, November 18, 2004: We have solid proof against seer: Jaya Times News Network, November 18, 2004: Police have solid proof against pontiff: Jaya UNI, November 18, 2004: Shankaracharya produced before court Express News Service, November 18, 2004: Cops have shocking information, details Hindustan Times, November 18, 2004: Shankaracharya remanded to five-day police custody External Links Kanchi-Satya -
Revised:  Shankaracharya remanded to 5-day police custody Deccan Herald%DIFDELCMD < & %%% External Links Kanchi-Satya -
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Original:  Authentic Information on the Issue%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category: November 18, 2004 Category: India Category: Tamil Na
Revised:  Authentic Information on the Issue%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  2008 the 13th Taipei International Express Marathon, mainly sponsored by Carrefour second time since 2007, raced yesterday on Hsichih-Wugu Elevated Viaduct of Taiwan National Highway No. 1. Even though it rained until the starting of marathon and half-marathon class, but the race finally finished properly with its weather progressively improved to be not rained  
Revised:  2008 the 13th Taipei International Express Marathon, mainly sponsored by Carrefour second time since 2007, raced on Hsichih-Wugu Elevated Viaduct of Taiwan National Highway No. 1. Even though it rained until the starting of marathon and half-marathon class, but the race finally finished properly with its weather progressively improved to be not rained 
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Original:  Even though it rained until the starting of marathon and half-marathon classes, but the race finally finished properlywith its weather progressively improved to be not rained.
Revised:  Although it rained until the starting of marathon and half-marathon classes, but the race finally finished properlywith its weather progressively improved to be not rained.
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Original:  Even though it rained until the starting of marathon and half-marathon classes, but the race finally finished properlywith its weather progressively improved to be not rained.
Revised:  Even though it rained until the start of the marathon and half-marathon classes, but the race finally finished properlywith its weather progressively improved to be not rained.
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Original:  Even though an improved weather, but the gradient near the Hsichih stop of Hsichih-Wugu Elevated Viaduct made a major challenge on runners' physical strength.
Revised:  Even though an improved weather, the gradient near the Hsichih stop of Hsichih-Wugu Elevated Viaduct made a major challenge on runners' physical strength.
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Original:  Even though an improved weather, but the gradient near the Hsichih stop of Hsichih-Wugu Elevated Viaduct made a major challenge on runners' physical strength.
Revised:  Even though an improved weather, but the gradient near the Hsichih stop of Hsichih-Wugu Elevated Viaduct provided a major challenge on runners' physical strength.
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Original:  Even though an improved weather, but the gradient near the Hsichih stop of Hsichih-Wugu Elevated Viaduct made a major challenge on runners' physical strength.
Revised:  Even though an improved weather, but the gradient near the Hsichih stop of Hsichih-Wugu Elevated Viaduct made a major challenge to the runners' physical strength.
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Original:  As of the Chinese Taipei Road Running Association, the organizer of this race, their executives invited several world-class marathon runners by performances on several international marathon races before this race.
Revised:  The race's organizer, the Chinese Taipei Road Running Association, the organizer of this race, their executives invited several world-class marathon runners by performances on several international marathon races before this race.
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Original:  As of the Chinese Taipei Road Running Association, the organizer of this race, their executives invited several world-class marathon runners by performances on several international marathon races before this race.
Revised:  As of the Chinese Taipei Road Running Association, invited several world-class marathon runners by performances on several international marathon races before this race.
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Original: George and Laura Bush introducing the egg roll noicon|The audio of the speeches made by Mr and Mrs Bush The President of the United States, George W. Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House egg roll.
Revised: George and Laura Bush introducing the rick roll noicon|The audio of the speeches made by Mr and Mrs Bush The President of the United States, George W. Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House egg roll.
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Original: George and Laura Bush introducing the egg roll noicon|The audio of the speeches made by Mr and Mrs Bush The President of the United States, George W. Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House egg roll.
Revised: George and Laura Bush introducing the egg roll noicon|The audio of the speeches made by Mr and Mrs Bush The President of the United States, George W. Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House rick roll.
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Original:  Mrs. Bush introduced the attendees to the event by saying "welcome, everybody, to the White House Easter Egg Roll, the 2008 Easter Egg Roll.
Revised:  Mrs. Bush introduced the attendees to the event by saying "welcome, everybody, to the White House Easter Rick Roll, the 2008 Easter Egg Roll.
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Original:  Mrs. Bush introduced the attendees to the event by saying "welcome, everybody, to the White House Easter Egg Roll, the 2008 Easter Egg Roll.
Revised:  Mrs. Bush introduced the attendees to the event by saying "welcome, everybody, to the White House Easter Egg Roll, the 2008 Easter Rick Roll.
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Original:  "We [the Bush family] want to remind you that we're dedicating today's Easter Egg Roll to our clean oceans.
Revised:  "We [the Bush family] want to remind you that we're dedicating today's Easter Rick Roll to our clean oceans.
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Original:  7,500 eggs are being provided for 2008 egg roll, with the White House estimating before the event that 22,00 people will attend this year.
Revised:  7,500 rick rolls are being provided for 2008 egg roll, with the White House estimating before the event that 22,00 people will attend this year.
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Original:  7,500 eggs are being provided for 2008 egg roll, with the White House estimating before the event that 22,00 people will attend this year.
Revised:  7,500 eggs are being provided for 2008 rick roll, with the White House estimating before the event that 22,00 people will attend this year.
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Original: George and Laura Bush introducing the egg roll noicon| Rick Astley - Never Gonna Give You Up The President of the United States, George W. Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House egg roll.
Revised: George and Laura Bush introducing the egg roll noicon| Rick Astley - Never Gonna Give You Up The President of the United States, George Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House egg roll.
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Original: George and Laura Bush introducing the egg roll noicon|The audio of the speeches made by Mr and Mrs Bush The President of the United States, George Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House egg roll.
Revised: George and Laura Bush introducing the rick roll noicon|The audio of the speeches made by Mr and Mrs Bush The President of the United States, George Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House egg roll.
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Original: George and Laura Bush introducing the egg roll noicon|The audio of the speeches made by Mr and Mrs Bush The President of the United States, George Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House egg roll.
Revised: George and Laura Bush introducing the egg roll noicon|The audio of the speeches made by Mr and Mrs Bush The President of the United States, George Bush and his wife, Laura Bush have introduced the 2008 White House rick roll.
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Original:  Mrs. Bush introduced the attendees to the event by saying "welcome, everybody, to the White House Easter Egg Roll, the 2008 Easter Egg Roll.
Revised:  Mrs. Bush introduced the attendees to the event by saying "welcome, everybody, to the White House Easter rick Roll, the 2008 Easter Egg Roll.
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Original:  Mrs. Bush introduced the attendees to the event by saying "welcome, everybody, to the White House Easter Egg Roll, the 2008 Easter Egg Roll.
Revised:  Mrs. Bush introduced the attendees to the event by saying "welcome, everybody, to the White House Easter Egg Roll, the 2008 Easter rick Roll.
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Original:  "We [the Bush family] want to remind you that we're dedicating today's Easter Egg Roll to our clean oceans.
Revised:  "We [the Bush family] want to remind you that we're dedicating today's Easter rick roll to our clean oceans.
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Original: Image:Ayman al Zawahiri.jpg| Ayman al-Zawahiri in an FBI photo Al-Qaeda's second in command, Ayman al-Zawahiri has released a new audiotape calling for Muslims to attack Israeli and American targets in revenge for Israel's recent offensive in the Gaza Strip.
Revised:  Ayman al-Zawahiri in an FBI photo Al-Qaeda's second in command, Ayman al-Zawahiri has released a new audiotape calling for Muslims to attack Israeli and American targets in revenge for Israel's recent offensive in the Gaza Strip.
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Original:  Monitor the targets, collect money, prepare the equipment, plan with precision, and then – while relying on God – assault, seeking martyrdom and paradise," said Zawahiri.
Revised:  Monitor the targets, collect money, prepare the equipment, plan with precision, and then — while relying on God – assault, seeking martyrdom and paradise," said Zawahiri.
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Original:  Monitor the targets, collect money, prepare the equipment, plan with precision, and then – while relying on God – assault, seeking martyrdom and paradise," said Zawahiri.
Revised:  Monitor the targets, collect money, prepare the equipment, plan with precision, and then – while relying on God — assault, seeking martyrdom and paradise," said Zawahiri.
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Original:  In a separate recording released last week, al-Qaida leader Osama bin Laden called on Palestinians to reject negotiations and use "iron and fire" against Israel.
Revised:  In a separate recording released last week, al-Qaeda leader Osama bin Laden called on Palestinians to reject negotiations and use "iron and fire" against Israel.
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Original:    Is it difficult to make a planned plot for a video fit the music and the short time on offer?
Revised:  I think the artists just want to look good on the videos, that comes first ever since. Some of them still want something original happening but with the generally shrinking budgets a new style had to appear to squeeze creativity out of the mostly very limited money available and actually the artists don´t have a choice. Is it difficult to make a planned plot for a video fit the music and the short time on offer?
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Original:   Your credits span accross many artists and genres.
Revised:  Uwe:For me it is a challenge and still the freedom of creativity in this genre is a blast. I learned so many things by just trying them out and playing around with them. Your credits span accross many artists and genres.
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Original:   Which of your works would you say you enjoyed working on the most?
Revised:  Uwe:It is a great broadband, I was thrilled by the very different demands and characters I met so far. I personally like to do different styles just to keep creativtiy running and being challenged instead of repeating the same receipy over and over again. Which of your works would you say you enjoyed working on the most?
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Original:   Do you have anything new in the works at the moment?
Revised:  Uwe:Hmmmm. There are some;-) Do you have anything new in the works at the moment?
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Original:   Do you find commercial pressures, such as ensuring videos are not subject to censorship or filming deadlines, conflict with your interests as an artis 
Revised:  Do you find commercial pressures, such as ensuring videos are not subject to censorship or filming deadlines, conflict with your interests as an artist? 
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Original:  My videos didn´t really break those rules anyway but there are a lot...that´s what I though 
Revised:  My videos didn´t really break those rules anyway but there are a lot...that´s what I thought. 
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Original: Your credits span accross many artists and genres.
Revised: Your credits span across many artists and genres.
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Original: Uwe: I was into musicvideos for a while already, watching MTV for hours every day.
Revised: Uwe: I was into music videos for a while already, watching MTV for hours every day.
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Original:  Sometimes taking a shower makes my mind work, sometimes I would just sit in fron of my computer until the idea hits me.
Revised:  Sometimes taking a shower makes my mind work, sometimes I would just sit in front of my computer until the idea hits me.
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Original:  Uwe:The big budet hasn´t disappeared completely but the number of artist spending a lot is much smaller now and the budgets in general went down a lot.
Revised:  Uwe:The big budget hasn´t disappeared completely but the number of artist spending a lot is much smaller now and the budgets in general went down a lot.
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Original:  So the homemade, handmade style since then is a big thing in musicvideos turning the budget shortage in creativity.
Revised:  So the homemade, handmade style since then is a big thing in music videos turning the budget shortage in creativity.
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Original:  I personally like to do different styles just to keep creativtiy running and being challenged instead of repeating the same receipy over and over again.
Revised:  I personally like to do different styles just to keep creativity running and being challenged instead of repeating the same receipy over and over again.
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Original:  The band and lable pay for the whole thing so they set up the limits which is totally fine for me.
Revised:  The band and label pay for the whole thing so they set up the limits which is totally fine for me.
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Original:  You tube changed a lot too.
Revised:  YouTube changed a lot too.
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Original:  It got over 31 000 000 views on youtube and counting, won lots of prizes and got a lot of press.
Revised:  It got over 31 000 000 views on YouTube and counting, won lots of prizes and got a lot of press.
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Original:  My videos didn´t really break those rules anyway but there are a lot...that´s what I thought . Category:Interview Category:Germany Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Mus
Revised:  My videos didn´t really break those rules anyway but there are a lot...that´s what I thought Category:Interview Category:Germany Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Mus
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Original:  My videos didn´t really break those rules anyway but there are a lot...that´s what I thought . Category:Interview Category:Germany Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Mus
Revised:  My videos didn´t really break those rules anyway but there are a lot...that´s what I thought . 
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Original:  Preoccupation with a malfunction of the Inertial Reference System diverted both pilot's attention from the flight instruments and allowed the increasing descent and bank angle to unnoticed... width=200px|CG render of Adam Air's PK-KKW Boeing 737-4Q8, which was lost in the accident "The Cockpit Voice recorder revealed that both pilots were concerned about navigation problems and subsequently become engrosses with trouble shooting Inertial Reference System (IRS)
Revised:  Preoccupation with a malfunction of the Inertial Reference System diverted both pilot's attention from the flight instruments and allowed the increasing descent and bank angle to unnoticed... width=200px|CG render of Adam Air's PK-KKW Boeing 737-4Q8, which was lost in the accident "The Cockpit Voice recorder revealed that both pilots were concerned about navigation problems and subsequently become engrossed with trouble shooting Inertial Reference System (IRS)
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Original: This B737-400 in standard Adam Air livery is comparable to the aircraft involved in all the accidents mentioned in this story.
Revised: This B737-400 is comparable to the aircraft involved in all the accidents mentioned in this story.
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Original: Interview Questions sent What initialy gave you the idea to stage New Zealand's first rock festival?
Revised: Interview : What initialy gave you the idea to stage New Zealand's first rock festival?
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Original:    How did you select the acts that would be performing and the other entertainment on offer?
Revised:  Phil: How did you select the acts that would be performing and the other entertainment on offer?
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Original:    How did you select the acts that would be performing and the other entertainment on offer?
Revised:  : How did you select the acts that would be performing and the other entertainment on offer?
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Original:    Is it true that Ozzy demanded the set be repainted from KISS colours to his own?
Revised:  Phil: Is it true that Ozzy demanded the set be repainted from KISS colours to his own?
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Original:    Is it true that Ozzy demanded the set be repainted from KISS colours to his own?
Revised:  : Is it true that Ozzy demanded the set be repainted from KISS colours to his own?
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Original:    What kind of reaction has there been from fans and the media to the festival?
Revised:  Phil: What kind of reaction has there been from fans and the media to the festival?
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Original:    What kind of reaction has there been from fans and the media to the festival?
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Original:    Three-quarters of a million dollars is a huge loss.
Revised:  : Three-quarters of a million dollars is a huge loss.
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Original:    Who is going to pay the price now?
Revised:  Phil: Who is going to pay the price now?
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Original:    Who is going to pay the price now?
Revised:  : Who is going to pay the price now?
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Original:    You believe Easter trading restrictions are responsible for low sales.
Revised:  Phil: You believe Easter trading restrictions are responsible for low sales.
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Original:    You believe Easter trading restrictions are responsible for low sales.
Revised:  : You believe Easter trading restrictions are responsible for low sales.
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Original:    Why were Easter restrictions not factored into plans before the festival?
Revised:  Phil: Why were Easter restrictions not factored into plans before the festival?
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Original:    Why were Easter restrictions not factored into plans before the festival?
Revised:  : Why were Easter restrictions not factored into plans before the festival?
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Original:    There were also 20 related arrests for minor offenses.
Revised:  Phil: There were also 20 related arrests for minor offenses.
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Original:    There were also 20 related arrests for minor offenses.
Revised:  : There were also 20 related arrests for minor offenses.
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Original:    What other events are you planning for the future?
Revised:  Phil: What other events are you planning for the future?
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Original:    What other events are you planning for the future?
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Original:    What would you like to say to any fans reading this no 
Revised:  Phil: What would you like to say to any fans reading this no 
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Original:    What would you like to say to any fans reading this no 
Revised:  : What would you like to say to any fans reading this no 
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Original:    What would you like to say to any fans reading this no 
Revised:  What would you like to say to any fans reading this now? 
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Original: : What initialy gave you the idea to stage New Zealand's first rock festival? : How did you select the acts that would be performing and the other entertainment on offer?
Revised:  What initialy gave you the idea to stage New Zealand's first rock festival? : How did you select the acts that would be performing and the other entertainment on offer?
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Original: : What initialy gave you the idea to stage New Zealand's first rock festival? : How did you select the acts that would be performing and the other entertainment on offer?
Revised: : What initialy gave you the idea to stage New Zealand's first rock festival? How did you select the acts that would be performing and the other entertainment on offer?
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