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Original:  However, as French rule straightened after the Franco-Siamese War, development slowly began in Cambodia, where rice and pepper crops allowed for the economy to grow.
Revised:  However, as French rule consolidated after the Franco-Siamese War, development slowly began in Cambodia, where rice and pepper crops allowed for the economy to grow.
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Original:  As regards  non-British colonies in Asia, Roosevelt and Stalin had decided in Tehran that the French and the Dutch would not return to Asia after the war.
Revised:  As regards In regards to non-British colonies in Asia, Roosevelt and Stalin had decided in Tehran that the French and the Dutch would not return to Asia after the war.
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Original: To further dramatise his "royal crusade for independence," Sihanouk , declaring that he would not return until the French gave assurances that full independence would be granted.
Revised: To further dramatise his "royal crusade for independence," Sihanouk declared that he would not return until the French gave assurances that full independence would be granted.
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Original:  In 1936, Son Ngoc Than and Pach Choeun began publishing Nagaravatta (Notre cité) as a French language anti-colonial and at times, anti-Vietnamese newspaper.
Revised:  In 1936, Son Ngoc Thanh and Pach Choeun began publishing Nagaravatta (Notre cité) as a French language anti-colonial and at times, anti-Vietnamese newspaper.
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Original:  This event was generally treated by the press, as well as by some scholars, as a "bloody coup by strongman Hun Sen", "Bloody coup" theory without much serious and neutral investigation into its causes and its development.
Revised:  This event was generally treated by the press, as well as by some scholars, as a "bloody coup by strongman Hun Sen", without much serious and neutral investigation into its causes and its development.
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Original:  Matthew Grainger, EU media guru says Ranariddh guilty Among the very few who attempted to look at evidence from both sides at the time were Australian ambassador to Cambodia Tony Kevin, Tony Kevin, U.S. Errs in Cambodia Policy, FEER 21 May 1998 and journalist Barry Wain, who wrote, "in circumstances that remain disputed, Mr. Hun Sen's military forces... defeated Prince Ranariddh's troops in Phnom Penh".
Revised:  Among the very few who attempted to look at evidence from both sides at the time were Australian ambassador to Cambodia Tony Kevin, Tony Kevin, U.S. Errs in Cambodia Policy, FEER 21 May 1998 and journalist Barry Wain, who wrote, "in circumstances that remain disputed, Mr. Hun Sen's military forces... defeated Prince Ranariddh's troops in Phnom Penh".
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Original:  Matthew Grainger, EU media guru says Ranariddh guilty Among the very few who attempted to look at evidence from both sides at the time were Australian ambassador to Cambodia Tony Kevin, Tony Kevin, U.S. Errs in Cambodia Policy, FEER 21 May 1998 and journalist Barry Wain, who wrote, "in circumstances that remain disputed, Mr. Hun Sen's military forces... defeated Prince Ranariddh's troops in Phnom Penh".
Revised:  Matthew Grainger, EU media guru says Ranariddh guilty Among the very few who attempted to look at evidence from both sides at the time were Australian ambassador to Cambodia Tony Kevin, and journalist Barry Wain, who wrote, "in circumstances that remain disputed, Mr. Hun Sen's military forces... defeated Prince Ranariddh's troops in Phnom Penh".
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Original:  Dr. Michael Vickery, The July 1997 shootout Hun Sen had alleged that Ranariddh had been planning a take-over with the help of Khmer Rouge fighters, supposedly smuggled into the capital (on the other hand, Hun Sen's army included a number of ex-Khmer rouge fighters).
Revised:  Hun Sen had alleged that Ranariddh had been planning a take-over with the help of Khmer Rouge fighters, supposedly smuggled into the capital (on the other hand, Hun Sen's army included a number of ex-Khmer rouge fighters).
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Original:  Beijing announced a $1 billion aid package for Phnom Penh two days URL Retrieved-May-20-2014
Revised:  Beijing announced a $1 billion aid package for Phnom Penh two days later.
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Original: Another critical work is his Knowledge of Good (Robert S. HARTMAN, Arthur ELLIS and Rem B. EDWARDS , 2002 Rodopi Press) a thorough study of all the philosophical discussions of goodness and what gaps exist in a complete philosophy of value.
Revised: Another critical work is his Knowledge of Good (Robert S. Hartman, Arthur Ellis and Rem B. EDWARDS , 2002 Rodopi Press) a thorough study of all the philosophical discussions of goodness and what gaps exist in a complete philosophy of value.
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Original: Another critical work is his Knowledge of Good (Robert S. HARTMAN, Arthur ELLIS and Rem B. EDWARDS , 2002 Rodopi Press) a thorough study of all the philosophical discussions of goodness and what gaps exist in a complete philosophy of value.
Revised: Another critical work is his Knowledge of Good (Robert S. HARTMAN, Arthur ELLIS and Rem B. Edwards , 2002 Rodopi Press) a thorough study of all the philosophical discussions of goodness and what gaps exist in a complete philosophy of value.
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Original:   In 1941 he migrated to the United States and became a citizen.
Revised:  Career In 1941 he migrated to the United States and became a citizen.
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Original:   Hartman died in Cuernavaca, Mexico on September 20, 1973.
Revised:  Death Hartman died in Cuernavaca, Mexico on September 20, 1973.
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Original:  For the previous 10 years, Jan lived in Hertfordshire, England, with his wife, Stacey McNutt, a book editor .
Revised:  For the previous 10 years, Jan lived in Hertfordshire, England, with his wife, Stacey McNutt, a book editor 
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Original:  An institute has been set up in honor of Robert S. Hartman to explore the implications of his work in formal axiology and value science .
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Original:  Membership Types The Robert S. Hartman Institute is a volunteer-run organization made up of a global membership URL Membership types include Professional Membership, Teacher/Instructor Membership, Student Membership, and Axiological Service Provider URL      
Revised:  Membership Types The Robert S. Hartman Institute is a volunteer-run organization made up of a global membership URL Membership types include Professional Membership, Teacher/Instructor Membership, Student Membership, and Axiological Service Provider URL Published Works Hartman was a prolific writer with some of his works published and many available in their original manuscript form at the University of Tennessee Knoxville Archives. The Robert S. Hartman Institute is working diligently to bring as many of these manuscripts to publication as possible. 
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Original: Career Hartman  s rejection of Fascism brought him into conflict with the Nazi party and forced him to leave Germany, using a fake passport, in 1932.
Revised: Career Hartman ' s rejection of Fascism brought him into conflict with the Nazi party and forced him to leave Germany, using a fake passport, in 1932.
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Original: Robert S. Hartman Institute The Robert S. Hartman Institute for Formal and Applied Axiology was founded in URL and exists for the sole purpose of advancing the axiological work of Robert S. URL The Institute was developed in cooperation with heirs of Robert S. Hartman to advance study relating to Robert S. Hartman's unpublished and unfinished works held in the collections of the graduate library of the University of Tennessee,
Revised: Robert S. Hartman Institute The Robert S. Hartman Institute for Formal and Applied Axiology was founded in URL and exists for the sole purpose of advancing the axiological work of Robert S. Hartman. The Institute was developed in cooperation with heirs of Robert S. Hartman to advance study relating to Robert S. Hartman's unpublished and unfinished works held in the collections of the graduate library of the University of Tennessee,
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Original: S. Hartman and includes articles dealing primarily with axiological practice and application, as well as with theoretical URL Articles may be critical, constructive, creative, theoretical, or applied, and are focused on advancing our understanding of Hartmanian axiology and/or what can be done with it.
Revised: S. Hartman and includes articles dealing primarily with axiological practice and application, as well as with theoretical issues. Articles may be critical, constructive, creative, theoretical, or applied, and are focused on advancing our understanding of Hartmanian axiology and/or what can be done with it.
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Original:  Membership Types The Robert S. Hartman Institute is a volunteer-run organization made up of a global membership URL Membership types include Professional Membership, Teacher/Instructor Membership, Student Membership, and Axiological Service Provider URL
Revised:  Membership Types The Robert S. Hartman Institute is a volunteer-run organization made up of a global membership base. Membership types include Professional Membership, Teacher/Instructor Membership, Student Membership, and Axiological Service Provider URL
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Original:  Membership Types The Robert S. Hartman Institute is a volunteer-run organization made up of a global membership URL Membership types include Professional Membership, Teacher/Instructor Membership, Student Membership, and Axiological Service Provider URL
Revised:  Membership Types The Robert S. Hartman Institute is a volunteer-run organization made up of a global membership URL Membership types include Professional Membership, Teacher/Instructor Membership, Student Membership, and Axiological Service Provider Membership.
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Original: Contacts is a computerized address book included with the Apple operating systems iOS, iPadOS and macOS, previously Mac OS X and OS X. It includes various cloud synchronization capabilities and integrates with other Apple applications and features, including iMessage and FaceTime and the iCloud service (and previously its predecessor MobileMe).
Revised: Contacts is a computerized address book included with the Apple operating systems iOS, iPadOS and macOS, previously Mac OS X and OS X. It includes various cloud synchronization capabilities and integrates with other Apple applications and features, including iMessage and and the iCloud service (and previously its predecessor MobileMe).
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Original:  Category:Personal information managers Category:iOS software Category: i
Revised:  Category:Personal information managers Category:iOS software Category: iOS Category:IOS-based software made by Apple In
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Original:   Buryatsky, whose formal name was Alexander  Tikhomirov, was born February 10, 1982 in Ulan-Ude, the capital of Buryatia.
Revised:  Buryatsky, whose birth name was Alexander Tikhomirov, was born February 10, 1982 in Ulan-Ude, the capital of Buryatia.
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Original:   Buryatsky, whose formal name was Alexander  Tikhomirov, was born February 10, 1982 in Ulan-Ude, the capital of Buryatia.
Revised:  Buryatsky, whose formal name was Alexander Alexandrovitch Tikhomirov, was born February 10, 1982 in Ulan-Ude, the capital of Buryatia.
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Original:  He studied at a Muslim theological institute in Orenburg  run by one of Russia's official Muslim Spiritual Boards, and then, from 2002-2005,  in Cairo and Kuwait.
Revised:  He studied at a Muslim theological institute in Orenburg , run by one of Russia's official Muslim Spiritual Boards, and then, from 2002-2005, in Cairo and Kuwait.
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Original:  He studied at a Muslim theological institute in Orenburg  run by one of Russia's official Muslim Spiritual Boards, and then, from 2002-2005,  in Cairo and Kuwait.
Revised:  He studied at a Muslim theological institute in Orenburg run by one of Russia's official Muslim Spiritual Boards, and then, from 2002-2005, studied in Cairo and Kuwait.
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Original:   On March 2, 2010  Buryatsky was killed in the village of Ekazhevo in Ingushetia  during a Russian military operation involving units of the Federal Security Service (FSB) and the Russian Interior Ministry  .
Revised:  On March 2, 2010 , Buryatsky was killed in the village of Ekazhevo in Ingushetia during a Russian military operation involving units of the Federal Security Service (FSB) and the Russian Interior Ministry .
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Original:   On March 2, 2010  Buryatsky was killed in the village of Ekazhevo in Ingushetia  during a Russian military operation involving units of the Federal Security Service (FSB) and the Russian Interior Ministry  .
Revised:  On March 2, 2010 Buryatsky was killed in the village of Ekazhevo in Ingushetia (Russia), during a Russian military operation involving units of the Federal Security Service (FSB) and the Russian Interior Ministry .
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Original:  His father was a Buryat Buddhist , and his mother was a Russian Christian . Raised as Buddhist, he reportedly converted to Islam at the age of 15.
Revised:  His father was a Russian Christian , and his mother was a Russian Christian . Raised as Buddhist, he reportedly converted to Islam at the age of 15.
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Original:  His father was a Buryat Buddhist , and his mother was a Russian Christian . Raised as Buddhist, he reportedly converted to Islam at the age of 15.
Revised:  His father was a Buryat Buddhist , and his mother was a Buryat Buddhist . Raised as Buddhist, he reportedly converted to Islam at the age of 15.
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Original: Legacy Ayatullah Khomenei (R.A) publicly proclaimed Chamran as a "proud commander of Islam."
Revised: Legacy Ayatullah Khomenei publicly proclaimed Chamran as a "proud commander of Islam."
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Original: Iranian scientists Category:Iranian Shia Muslims Category:Members of the 1st Islamic Consultative Assembly Category:Military personnel killed by friendly fire Category:Military personnel killed in action Category:National Front (Iran) student activists Category:People of the Iranian Revolution Category:Texas A&M University alumni Category:UC Berkeley College of Engineering alumni Category:University of Tehran alumni Category:Unsolved murders in Iran Category:20th-century Iranian enginee
Revised: Iranian scientists Category:Iranian Shia Muslims Category:Members of the 1st Islamic Consultative Assembly Category:Military personnel killed by friendly fire Category:Military personnel killed in action Category:National Front (Iran) student activists Category:People of the Iranian Revolution Category:Texas A&M University alumni Category:UC Berkeley College of Engineering alumni Category:University of Tehran alumni Category:Unsolved murders in Iran Category:20th-century Iranian engineers Category:20th-century Iranian politicia
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Original:  Earlier he was educated by Ayatollah Taleqani and Morteza Motahari.
Revised:  He was educated by Ayatollah Taleqani and Morteza Motahari.
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Original: Mostafa Chamran Save'ei () (2 October 1932 – 21 June 1981 , Tehran, Iran ) was an Iranian physicist, politician, commander and guerrilla fighter who served as the first defense minister of post-revolutionary Iran and a member of parliament , as well as the commander of paramilitary volunteers in Iran–Iraq War, known as "Irregular Warfare Headquarters".
Revised: Mostafa Chamran Save'ei () (2 October 1932 – 21 June 1981 ) was an Iranian physicist, politician, commander and guerrilla fighter who served as the first defense minister of post-revolutionary Iran and a member of parliament , as well as the commander of paramilitary volunteers in Iran–Iraq War, known as "Irregular Warfare Headquarters".
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Original: Mostafa Chamran Save'ei () (2 October 1932 – 21 June 1981 , Tehran, Iran ) was an Iranian physicist, politician, commander and guerrilla fighter who served as the first defense minister of post-revolutionary Iran and a member of parliament , as well as the commander of paramilitary volunteers in Iran–Iraq War, known as "Irregular Warfare Headquarters".
Revised: Mostafa Chamran Save'ei () (2 October 1932 – 21 June 1981 , Tehran, Iran ) was an Iranian physicist, politician, commander and guerrilla fighter who served as the first defense minister of post-revolutionary Iran and a member of parliament as well as the commander of paramilitary volunteers in Iran–Iraq War, known as "Irregular Warfare Headquarters".
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Original:  In the book " Self-construction and development " he said he was hired as research staff scientist at Bell Laboratories and NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory in the 1960s.
Revised:  In the book Self-construction and development " he said he was hired as research staff scientist at Bell Laboratories and NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory in the 1960s.
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Original:  In the book " Self-construction and development " he said he was hired as research staff scientist at Bell Laboratories and NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory in the 1960s.
Revised:  In the book " Self-construction and development he said he was hired as research staff scientist at Bell Laboratories and NASA's Jet Propulsion Laboratory in the 1960s.
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Original: Members of the 1st Islamic Consultative Assembly Category:Military personnel killed by friendly fire Category:Military personnel killed in action Category:National Front (Iran) student activists Category:People of the Iranian Revolution Category:Texas A&M University alumni Category:UC Berkeley College of Engineering alumni Category:University of Tehran alumni Category:Unsolved murders in Iran Category:20th-century Iranian engineers Category:20th-century Iranian politicia
Revised: Members of the 1st Islamic Consultative Assembly Category:Military personnel killed by friendly fire Category:Military personnel killed in action Category:National Front (Iran) student activists Category:People of the Iranian Revolution Category:Texas A&M University alumni Category:UC Berkeley College of Engineering alumni Category:University of Tehran alumni Category:Unsolved murders in Ir
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Original: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:
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Original:  William Bradley (10 February 1787 – 30 May 1820), known more commonly as Giant Bradley or the Yorkshire Giant, is the tallest recorded British man that ever lived, measuring . Bradley was taller than Bao Xishun, who was recognised as world's tallest living man by Guinness World Records between 2005 and 2007.
Revised:  William Bradley (10 February 1787 – 30 May 1820), known more commonly as Giant Bradley or the Yorkshire Giant, is the tallest recorded British man that ever lived, measuring . 
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Original:  As the tallest British man, Bradley was a prized asset in the business joining the huge Yorkshire Pig which was bred in Sancton two miles from Market Weighton.
Revised:  As the tallest British man, Bradley was a prized asset in the business joining the huge Yorkshire person which was bred in Sancton two miles from Market Weighton.
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Original: Biography Gennadiy Gennadiyovych Moskal was born on 11 December 1950 in Zadubrivka village, Zastavna District , Chernivtsi Oblast into a family of public servants.biographyGennadiy Moskal, peoples.ru His father, Gennady Hadeyovych Hayfulin (or Hayfullin), Геннадий Москаль — самый обсуждаемый политик was an ethnic Tatar.
Revised: Biography Gennadiy Gennadiyovych Moskal was born on 11 December 1950 in Zadubrivka , Zastavna Raion , Chernivtsi Oblast into a family of public servants.biographyGennadiy Moskal, peoples.ru His father, Gennady Hadeyovych Hayfulin (or Hayfullin), Геннадий Москаль — самый обсуждаемый политик was an ethnic Tatar.
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Original:  party's press service, Interfax-Ukraine (25 August 2014) "Fatherland" explained that Moskal is out for the support of Poroshenko in elections, Ukrayinska Pravda (25 August 2014) From then till June 2019 Moskal was a member of the party Petro Poroshenko URL In the 2019 Ukrainian parliamentary election Moskal did not get elected (as an independent candidate) after losing in single-seat constituency 106 in Severodonetsk, with 11.99\% of the URL
Revised:  party's press service, Interfax-Ukraine (25 August 2014) "Fatherland" explained that Moskal is out for the support of Poroshenko in elections, Ukrayinska Pravda (25 August 2014) From then till June 2019 Moskal was a member of the party Petro Poroshenko Bloc. In the 2019 Ukrainian parliamentary election Moskal did not get elected (as an independent candidate) after losing in single-seat constituency 106 in Severodonetsk, with 11.99\% of the URL
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Original:  party's press service, Interfax-Ukraine (25 August 2014) "Fatherland" explained that Moskal is out for the support of Poroshenko in elections, Ukrayinska Pravda (25 August 2014) From then till June 2019 Moskal was a member of the party Petro Poroshenko URL In the 2019 Ukrainian parliamentary election Moskal did not get elected (as an independent candidate) after losing in single-seat constituency 106 in Severodonetsk, with 11.99\% of the URL
Revised:  party's press service, Interfax-Ukraine (25 August 2014) "Fatherland" explained that Moskal is out for the support of Poroshenko in elections, Ukrayinska Pravda (25 August 2014) From then till June 2019 Moskal was a member of the party Petro Poroshenko URL In the 2019 Ukrainian parliamentary election Moskal did not get elected (as an independent candidate) after losing in single-seat constituency 106 in Severodonetsk, with 11.99\% of the vote.
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Original: Arsinoe ( Greek: ), sometimes called Arsinoe Epidires, was an ancient city of the Avalitæ, at Dire promontory in Eritrea, north of Berenice Epideires, and near the entrance of the Red Sea (Bab-el-Mandeb).
Revised: Arsinoe ( ), sometimes called Arsinoe Epidires, was an ancient city of the Avalitæ, at Dire promontory in Eritrea, north of Berenice Epideires, and near the entrance of the Red Sea (Bab-el-Mandeb).
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Original:  Ptol. iv. 5. § 14.) Richard Talbert, Barrington Atlas of the Greek and Roman World, (), p. 4. External links Hazlitt, Classical Gazetteer, p. 52 Category:Populated places established in the 3rd century BC Category:History of Eritrea Category:Ptolemaic colonies in the Red S
Revised:  Ptol. iv. 5. § 14.) External links Hazlitt, Classical Gazetteer, p. 52 Category:Populated places established in the 3rd century BC Category:History of Eritrea Category:Ptolemaic colonies in the Red S
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Original:  Ptol. iv. 5. § 14.) Richard Talbert, Barrington Atlas of the Greek and Roman World, (), p. 4. External links Hazlitt, Classical Gazetteer, p. 52 Category:Populated places established in the 3rd century BC Category:History of Eritrea Category:Ptolemaic colonies in the Red S
Revised:  Ptol. iv. 5. § 14.) Richard Talbert, Barrington Atlas of the Greek and Roman World, (), p. 4. External links Hazlitt, Classical Gazetteer, p. 52 Category:Populated places established in the 3rd century BC Category:History of Eritrea Category:Ptolemaic colonies in the Red Sea Category:Former populated places in Eritr
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Original:  The rims are then notched in order to allow an index of the relationship of the maxillary rim to the mandibular rim with an impressionable medium, such as Alluwax or Regisa 
Revised:  The rims are then notched in order to allow an index of the relationship of the maxillary rim to the mandibular rim with an impressionable medium, such as Alluwax or Regisal. 
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