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Original:  Anglican, Catholic, Baptist, Presbyterian, Buddhist, Hindu, Lutheran, Sikh, Salvation Army, Wesleyan and Seventh-Day Adventist religious groups issued a signed statement yesterday calling for laws limiting abortions after  20 weeks .
Revised:  Anglican, Catholic, Baptist, Presbyterian, Buddhist, Hindu, Lutheran, Sikh, Salvation Army, Wesleyan and Seventh-Day Adventist religious groups issued a signed statement yesterday calling for laws limiting abortions after a pregnancy has reached its 20 weeks .
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Original:  Anglican, Catholic, Baptist, Presbyterian, Buddhist, Hindu, Lutheran, Sikh, Salvation Army, Wesleyan and Seventh-Day Adventist religious groups issued a signed statement yesterday calling for laws limiting abortions after  20 weeks .
Revised:  Anglican, Catholic, Baptist, Presbyterian, Buddhist, Hindu, Lutheran, Sikh, Salvation Army, Wesleyan and Seventh-Day Adventist religious groups issued a signed statement yesterday calling for laws limiting abortions after 20 week .
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Original:  Specifically, that they be told of the health risks, the stage of  foetal development and the  nature of the medical procedure.
Revised:  They should receive detailed information about the health risks, the stage of foetal development and the nature of the medical procedure.
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Original:  Specifically, that they be told of the health risks, the stage of  foetal development and the  nature of the medical procedure.
Revised:  Specifically, that they be told of the health risks, the stage of foetal development and the exact nature of the medical procedure.
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Original:  In addition, that they be given seven days to reconsider their decision.
Revised:  Additionally, a seven day "cooling down perios" should follow initial counseling to give women more time to consider their decision.
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Original:    New South Wales Premier Bob Carr has revealed that of 31,600 abortions in NSW last year, only 200 were  late term.
Revised:  And New South Wales Premier Bob Carr has revealed that of 31,600 abortions in NSW last year, only 200 were late term.
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Original:  Prime Minister John Howard has been encouraging debate without taking a solid position . Public opinion is generally pro-choice in Australia, a point conceded by church groups.
Revised:  Prime Minister John Howard has been encouraging debate without taking a solid position . 
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Original: The statement also calls for for information to be provided to women considering abortion.
Revised: The statement also calls for information to be provided to women considering abortion.
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Original:  The news follows two weeks of headlines caused by the release of over 1000 foreign prison mistakenly released from prison at the end of their sentence rather than being deported.
Revised:  The news follows two weeks of headlines caused by the release of over 1000 foreign prisoners mistakenly released from prison at the end of their sentence rather than being deported.
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Original:  The arrested include pheasant leader, Ignacio del Valle.
Revised:  The arrested include peasant leader, Ignacio del Valle.
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Original: 190px Acclaimed Hindi music composer Naushad Ali passed away due to old-age in Mumbai this morning at the age of 86.
Revised:  Acclaimed Hindi music composer Naushad Ali passed away due to old-age in Mumbai this morning at the age of 86.
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Original:  Naushad Ali was awarded the prestigious Dadasaheb Phalke Award for Lifetime Contribution to Hindi Cinema in 1981. category:India category:obituari
Revised:  Naushad Ali was awarded the prestigious Dadasaheb Phalke Award for Lifetime Contribution to Hindi Cinema in category:India category:obituari
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Original:  Naushad Ali was awarded the prestigious Dadasaheb Phalke Award for Lifetime Contribution to Hindi Cinema in 1981. category:India category:obituari
Revised:  Naushad Ali was awarded the prestigious Dadasaheb Phalke Award for Lifetime Contribution to Hindi Cinema in 1981. 1981
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Original:  Ali had composed music for hit Hindi films such as Mughal-e-Azam, Mother India and Bajju Bawra .
Revised:  Ali had composed music for popular Hindi films such as Mughal-e-Azam, Mother India and Bajju Bawra .
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Original: The new plan requires complete disarmament of  Janjaweed militia by mid-October , places restrictions on the movements of the paramilitary Forces and requires them to be reduced in size , establishes buffer zones around IDP [internally displaced persons] camps and humanitarian assistance corridors, into which rebel forces and Sudanese Armed Forces cannot go ,defines the principles for integration of the rebel forces into the Sudanese armed forces and police. -
Revised: The new plan requires complete disarmament of Janjaweed militia by mid-October . - Placing restrictions on the movements of the paramilitary Forces and requires them to be reduced in size , establishes buffer zones around IDP [internally displaced persons] camps and humanitarian assistance corridors, into which rebel forces and Sudanese Armed Forces cannot go ,defines the principles for integration of the rebel forces into the Sudanese armed forces and police. -
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Original: The new plan requires complete disarmament of  Janjaweed militia by mid-October , places restrictions on the movements of the paramilitary Forces and requires them to be reduced in size , establishes buffer zones around IDP [internally displaced persons] camps and humanitarian assistance corridors, into which rebel forces and Sudanese Armed Forces cannot go ,defines the principles for integration of the rebel forces into the Sudanese armed forces and police. -
Revised: The new plan requires complete disarmament of Janjaweed militia by mid-October , places restrictions on the movements of the paramilitary Forces and requires them to be reduced in size . - Establishing buffer zones around IDP [internally displaced persons] camps and humanitarian assistance corridors, into which rebel forces and Sudanese Armed Forces cannot go ,defines the principles for integration of the rebel forces into the Sudanese armed forces and police. -
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Original: The new plan requires complete disarmament of  Janjaweed militia by mid-October , places restrictions on the movements of the paramilitary Forces and requires them to be reduced in size , establishes buffer zones around IDP [internally displaced persons] camps and humanitarian assistance corridors, into which rebel forces and Sudanese Armed Forces cannot go ,defines the principles for integration of the rebel forces into the Sudanese armed forces and police. -
Revised: The new plan requires complete disarmament of Janjaweed militia by mid-October , places restrictions on the movements of the paramilitary Forces and requires them to be reduced in size , establishes buffer zones around IDP [internally displaced persons] camps and humanitarian assistance corridors, into which rebel forces and Sudanese Armed Forces cannot go . - Defining the principles for integration of the rebel forces into the Sudanese armed forces and police. -
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Original:   4,000 former combatants will be integrated into the army. -  1,000 will be integrated into the police. -  3,000 will be supported through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur.
Revised:  4,000 former combatants into the army. - 1,000 will be integrated into the police. - 3,000 will be supported through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur.
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Original:   4,000 former combatants will be integrated into the army. -  1,000 will be integrated into the police. -  3,000 will be supported through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur.
Revised:  4,000 former combatants will be integrated into the army. - 1,000 into the police. - 3,000 will be supported through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur.
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Original:   4,000 former combatants will be integrated into the army. -  1,000 will be integrated into the police. -  3,000 will be supported through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur.
Revised:  4,000 former combatants will be integrated into the army. - 1,000 will be integrated into the police. - Supporting 3,000 will be supported through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur.
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Original:   4,000 former combatants will be integrated into the army. -  1,000 will be integrated into the police. -  3,000 will be supported through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur.
Revised:  4,000 former combatants will be integrated into the army. - 1,000 will be integrated into the police. - 3,000 through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur.
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Original:  It also provides "for strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces " In power sharing the agreement gives the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
Revised:  - Providing strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces " In power sharing the agreement gives the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
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Original:  It also provides "for strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces " In power sharing the agreement gives the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
Revised:  It also provides "for strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces In power sharing the agreement gives the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
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Original:  It also provides "for strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces " In power sharing the agreement gives the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
Revised:  It also provides "for strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces " . - Giving the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
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Original:  senior assistant to the president and chairperson of the transitional Darfur regional authority ,establishes democratic processes for the people of Darfur to choose their leaders and determine their status as a region. -
Revised:  senior assistant to the president and chairperson of the transitional Darfur regional authority . - Establishing democratic processes for the people of Darfur to choose their leaders and determine their status as a region. -
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Original:  A popular referendum by July 2010 is to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. -  Elections at every level of government shall be held not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Grants the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
Revised:  Arranging a popular referendum by July 2010 is to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. - Elections at every level of government shall be held not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Grants the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
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Original:  A popular referendum by July 2010 is to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. -  Elections at every level of government shall be held not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Grants the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
Revised:  A popular referendum by July 2010 to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. - Elections at every level of government shall be held not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Grants the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
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Original:  A popular referendum by July 2010 is to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. -  Elections at every level of government shall be held not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Grants the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
Revised:  A popular referendum by July 2010 is to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. - Holding Elections at every level of government shall be held not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Grants the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
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Original:  A popular referendum by July 2010 is to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. -  Elections at every level of government shall be held not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Grants the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
Revised:  A popular referendum by July 2010 is to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. - Elections at every level of government not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Grants the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
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Original:  A popular referendum by July 2010 is to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. -  Elections at every level of government shall be held not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Grants the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
Revised:  A popular referendum by July 2010 is to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. - Elections at every level of government shall be held not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Granting the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
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Original:  Allocates to the rebel movements 12 seats in the national assembly in Khartoum. -
Revised:  Allocating to the rebel movements 12 seats in the national assembly in Khartoum. -
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Original:  Allocates to the rebel movements 21 seats in each of the Darfur state legislatures. -
Revised:  Allocating to the rebel movements 21 seats in each of the Darfur state legislatures. -
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Original:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
Revised:  Awarding to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
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Original:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
Revised:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocating to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
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Original:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
Revised:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guaranteeing to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
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Original:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
Revised:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% - Creating a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
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Original:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
Revised:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - Contributing $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
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Original:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years .
Revised:  Awards to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. - Allocates to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. - Guarantees to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In wealth-sharing, The agreement creates a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. - The government of national unity will contribute $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years 
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Original:  It calls for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement  - to determine the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur , establishes a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes ,creates a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
Revised:  It calls for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement . - to determine the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur , establishes a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes ,creates a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
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Original:  It calls for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement  - to determine the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur , establishes a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes ,creates a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
Revised:  It calls for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement - Determining the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur , establishes a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes ,creates a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
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