wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Category:Living people Category:People from Sarawak Category: 1945 births Category:Parti Pesaka Bumiputera Bersatu politicians Category:Sarawak state ministers Category:Members of the Sarawak State Legislative Assembly Category:Knights Commander of the Most Exalted Order of the Star of Sarawak Category:Members of the Order of the Defender of the Realm  Category:Commanders of the Order of the Star of Hornbill Saraw
Revised:  Category:Living people Category:People from Sarawak Category: 1944 births Category:Parti Pesaka Bumiputera Bersatu politicians Category:Sarawak state ministers Category:Members of the Sarawak State Legislative Assembly Category:Knights Commander of the Most Exalted Order of the Star of Sarawak Category:Members of the Order of the Defender of the Realm Category:Commanders of the Order of the Star of Hornbill Saraw
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Original: Dato' Sri Michael Manyin anak Jawong (born 25 May 1944) is the current Sarawak Minister of Education, Science and Technological ResearchSix new faces;
Revised: Datuk Amar Michael Manyin anak Jawong (born 25 May 1944) is the current Sarawak Minister of Education, Science and Technological ResearchSix new faces;
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Original:  Dato' Sri (2009)  Category:Living people Category:People from Sarawak Category:1944 births Category:Parti Pesaka Bumiputera Bersatu politicians Category:Sarawak state ministers Category:Members of the Sarawak State Legislative Assembly Category:Knights Commander of the Most Exalted Order of the Star of Sarawak Category:Members of the Order of the Defender of the Realm Category:Bidayuh people  Category:Commanders of the Order of the Star of Hornbill Saraw
Revised:  Dato' Sri (2009) Category:Living people Category:People from Sarawak Category:1944 births Category:Parti Pesaka Bumiputera Bersatu politicians Category:Sarawak state ministers Category:Members of the Sarawak State Legislative Assembly Category:Knights Commander of the Most Exalted Order of the Star of Sarawak Category:Members of the Order of the Defender of the Realm Category:Bidayuh people Category:Knights Commander of the Order of the Star of Hornbill Sarawak Category:Commanders of the Order of the Star of Hornbill Saraw
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Original: Datuk Amar Michael Manyin anak Jawong (born 25 May 1944) is the current Sarawak Minister of Education, Science and Technological ResearchSix new faces;
Revised: Datuk Amar Michael Manyin anak Jawong (born 25 May 1944) is the current Sarawak Minister of Education, Science and Technological Research.Six new faces;
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Original:  three dropped, The Borneo Post He is also a member of Sarawak State Legislative assembly for Tebedu in Sarawak.
Revised:  three dropped, The Borneo Post and Member of the Sarawak State Legislative assembly for Tebedu in Sarawak.
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Original:  three dropped, The Borneo Post He is also a member of Sarawak State Legislative assembly for Tebedu in Sarawak.
Revised:  three dropped, The Borneo Post He is also a member of Sarawak State Legislative Assembly (MLA) for Tebedu in Sarawak.
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Original:  Some indicators that investigators use are Rigor Mortis, lividity, body core temperature  , clouding of the corneas, evidence of the decompositional process  , presence/absence of purge fluid, and drying of tissues .
Revised:  Some indicators that investigators use are rigor mortis, livor mortis, , clouding of the corneas, evidence of the decompositional process , presence/absence of purge fluid, and drying of tissues .
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Original:  Some indicators that investigators use are Rigor Mortis, lividity, body core temperature  , clouding of the corneas, evidence of the decompositional process  , presence/absence of purge fluid, and drying of tissues .
Revised:  Some indicators that investigators use are Rigor Mortis, lividity, body core temperature , clouding of the cornea , presence/absence of purge fluid, and drying of tissues .
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Original:  Some indicators that investigators use are Rigor Mortis, lividity, body core temperature  , clouding of the corneas, evidence of the decompositional process  , presence/absence of purge fluid, and drying of tissues .
Revised:  Some indicators that investigators use are Rigor Mortis, lividity, body core temperature , clouding of the corneas, evidence of the decompositional process , presence/absence of purged fluids and level of tissue dessication .
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Original:  Massinissa later died of his wounds in the Mustapha Hospital on 20th April 2001.
Revised:  Massinissa later died of his wounds in the Mustapha Hospital on 20 April 2001.
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Original:  In response to the Interior Minister's statement, Massinissa's parents sent the national press a school report stating that the Massinissa was indeed an eighteen year old school student.
Revised:  In response to the Interior Minister's statement, Massinissa's parents sent the national press a school report stating that the Massinissa was indeed an eighteen-year-old school student.
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Original: Massinissa Guermah (1983,  Beni Douala, Tizi Ouzou Province - 20 April 2001) was an 18-year-old Kabyle (Berber) high school student arrested by Algerian gendarmes on 18 April 2001.
Revised: Massinissa Guermah (1983, in Beni Douala, Tizi Ouzou Province - 20 April 2001) was an 18-year-old Kabyle (Berber) high school student arrested by Algerian gendarmes on 18 April 2001.
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Original: Massinissa Guermah (1983,  Beni Douala, Tizi Ouzou Province - 20 April 2001) was an 18-year-old Kabyle (Berber) high school student arrested by Algerian gendarmes on 18 April 2001.
Revised: Massinissa Guermah (1983, Beni Douala, Tizi Ouzou Province – 20 April 2001) was an 18-year-old Kabyle (Berber) high school student arrested by Algerian gendarmes on 18 April 2001.
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Original:  On 22 April 2001, the commander of La Gendarmerie Nationale released a statement in which he said that Massinissa Guermah had been arrested after aggressive behaviour following a theft.
Revised:  On 22 April 2001, the commander of La Gendarmerie Nationale released a statement in which he said that Guermah had been arrested after aggressive behaviour following a theft.
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Original:  Seven days after Massinissa 's death the military authorities explained how it had occurred.
Revised:  Seven days after Massinissa 's death the military authorities gave an account of how it had occurred.
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Original:  The violence was fuelled by an Algerian national campaign to impose  Arabic language on its people in place of indigenous languages, including Kabyle.
Revised:  The violence was fuelled by an Algerian national campaign to impose the Arabic language on its people in place of indigenous languages, including Kabyle.
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Original: Guermah's killing caused riots in Kabylie lasting for several months;
Revised: Guermah's killing caused riots in Kabylia lasting for several months;
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Original: The suggestion that the B-view of time can escape the problem by appealing to particulars that endure through time having different properties at different times , is controversial in its own right, but it is generally assumed that this is a controversy that has nothing to do with McTaggart.
Revised: The suggestion that the B-view of time can escape the problem by appealing to particulars that endure through time and have different properties at different times , is controversial in its own right, but it is generally assumed that this is a controversy that has nothing to do with McTaggart.
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Original: The suggestion that the B-view of time can escape the problem by appealing to particulars that endure through time having different properties at different times , is controversial in its own right, but it is generally assumed that this is a controversy that has nothing to do with McTaggart.
Revised: The suggestion that the B-view of time can escape the problem by appealing to particulars that endure through time having different properties at different times is controversial in its own right, but it is generally assumed that this is a controversy that has nothing to do with McTaggart.
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Original:  However, since it starts from the premise that the future and past can only be real by existing, then it is remains to show that this is what the A-view of time assumes.
Revised:  However, since it starts from the premise that the future and past can only be real by existing, then it remains to show that this is what the A-view of time assumes.
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Original: It should be noted that the A- and B-series are not mutually exclusive.
Revised: The A- and B-series are not mutually exclusive.
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Original:  This is, arguably, because by then he has come to treat tense as a simple and indefinable notion, and thus cannot argue that the terms need to be explained at all in order to be applied.
Revised:  This is, arguably, because by then he has come to treat tense as a simple and indefinable notion, and thus cannot contend that the terms need to be explained at all in order to be applied.
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Original:  R. D. Ingthorsson disputes this, and argues that the argument can only be understood as an attempt to draw out certain consequences of the metaphysical system that McTaggart presents in the 1st Volume of The Nature of Existence (Ingthorsson 1998 & 2016).
Revised:  R. D. Ingthorsson disputes this, and argues that the argument can only be understood as an attempt to draw out certain consequences of the metaphysical system that McTaggart presents in the first volume of The Nature of Existence (Ingthorsson 1998 & 2016).
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Original: Influence of "The Unreality of Time" McTaggart's argument has had an enormous influence on the philosophy of time.
Revised: Influence McTaggart's argument has had an enormous influence on the philosophy of time.
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Original:  Broad explains that McTaggart believed that the difficulty of identifying this entity was serious enough in its own right to be persuaded that time is unreal, but thinks that the contradiction of the A-series is still more convincing , wherefore he leaves this particular difficulty aside.
Revised:  Broad explains that McTaggart believed that the difficulty of identifying this entity was serious enough in its own right to be persuaded that time is unreal, but thinks that the contradiction of the A-series is still more convincing ; for that reason he leaves this particular difficulty aside.
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Original:  Prior to deployment the device required a tether providing electrical and mechanical connections to the surface vessel and a frame to ensure that it entered the seabed perpendicularly .
Revised:  Prior to deployment the device required a tether providing electrical and mechanical connections to the surface vessel and a frame to ensure that it entered the seabed perpendicularly 
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Original:  Figure 10. A) displacement-aspect of penetrator head showing water jet placement, B) side-view, C) diagram of jet-induced water flow pattern to fluidise sediments and encourage them to move up and out of the bore hole, D) Top view (perpendicular to viewing plane) showing area of disturbed (1) and undisturbed sediments, E) final casting for prototype .
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Original: George, p. 1Smith, pp. 66, 71–72  4,000 Cuban troops helped to turn back a three-pronged advance by the SADF, UNITA, FLNA, and Zairean troops.
Revised: George, p. 1Smith, pp. 66, 71–72 Some 4,000 Cuban troops helped to turn back a three-pronged advance by the SADF, UNITA, FLNA, and Zairean troops.
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Original: The Cuban intervention in Angola (codenamed Operation Carlota) began on 5 November 1975, when Cuba sent combat troops in support of the communist-aligned People's Movement for the Liberation of Angola (MPLA) in against the pro-western National Union for the Total Independence of Angola (UNITA) and National Liberation Front of Angola (FNLA).
Revised: The Cuban intervention in Angola (codenamed Operation Carlota) began on 5 November 1975, when Cuba sent combat troops in support of the communist-aligned People's Movement for the Liberation of Angola (MPLA) against the pro-western National Union for the Total Independence of Angola (UNITA) and National Liberation Front of Angola (FNLA).
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Original: The Cuban intervention in Angola (codenamed Operation Carlota) began on 5 November 1975, when Cuba sent combat troops in support of the communist-aligned People's Movement for the Liberation of Angola (MPLA) against the pro-western National Union for the Total Independence of Angola (UNITA) and National Liberation Front of Angola (FNLA).
Revised: The Cuban intervention in Angola (codenamed Operation Carlota) began on 5 November 1975, when Cuba sent combat troops in support of the communist-aligned People's Movement for the Liberation of Angola (MPLA) against the pro-capitalist/neo-bourgeoisie National Union for the Total Independence of Angola (UNITA) and National Liberation Front of Angola (FNLA).
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Original:  In 1993  he became the head of  UGTA for the petroleum industry  and in 1998 the national leader. 
Revised:  In 1993 , he became the head of UGTA for the petroleum industry and in 1998 the national leader. 
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Original:  In 1993  he became the head of  UGTA for the petroleum industry  and in 1998 the national leader. 
Revised:  In 1993 he became the head of the UGTA for the petroleum industry and in 1998 the national leader. 
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Original:  In 1993  he became the head of  UGTA for the petroleum industry  and in 1998 the national leader. 
Revised:  In 1993 he became the head of UGTA for the petroleum industry , and in 1998 the national leader. 
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Original: Abdelmadjid Sidi Said (born in 1946 in Oran) is an Algerian politician, and the leader of the General Union of Algerian Workers (UGTA) since 1998.
Revised: Abdelmadjid Sidi Said (born in 1946 in Oran) is an Algerian politician, and the leader of the General Union of Algerian Workers (UGTA) since 1997.
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Original: The National Liberation Front (FLN) had killed him because he was supposedly creating a cult of the individual rather than the collective leadership.
Revised: The National Liberation Front (FLN) had him killed, supposedly for creating a cult of the individual rather than the collective leadership.
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Original: 180px|Abane Ramdane Abane Ramdane (June 10, 1920, Larbaâ Nath Irathen – December 27, 1957) was an Algerian political activist and revolutionary born in Kabylie.
Revised:  Abane Ramdane (June 10, 1920, Larbaâ Nath Irathen – December 27, 1957) was an Algerian political activist and revolutionary born in Kabylie.
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Original:  His influence was so great that he was known as "the architect of the anti revolution".
Revised:  His influence was so great that he was known as "the architect of the revolution".
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Original: Abane Ramdane (June 10, 1920 , Larbaâ Nath Irathen – December 27, 1957) was an Algerian political activist and revolutionary born in Kabylie .
Revised: Abane Ramdane (June 10, 1920 – December 27, 1957) was an Algerian political activist and revolutionary born in Kabylie .
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Original: Abane Ramdane (June 10, 1920 , Larbaâ Nath Irathen – December 27, 1957) was an Algerian political activist and revolutionary born in Kabylie .
Revised: Abane Ramdane (June 10, 1920 , Larbaâ Nath Irathen – December 27, 1957) was an Algerian political activist and revolutionary .
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Original:  He fought and died against 20 French special forces with his soldiers (5-10), who remained in his hands.
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Original:  This event was much publicized, as Amirouche was considered to be a great threat to the French in Algeria '
Revised:  This event was much publicized, as Amirouche was considered to be a great threat to the French in Algeria .
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Original: Secularist politician Nordine Ait Hamouda is his son.
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Original:  Biography He was born on 31 October 1926 , at Tassaft Ouguemounin Algeria .
Revised:  Biography He was born on 31 October 1926 in Tassaft Ouguemoun, a small town in the Djurdjura. Orphan, he was the son of Amirouche Aït Hamouda and Fatima Aït Mendes Bent Ramdane. When his father died, he inherited his first name, as tradition required. A year after his birth, his widowed mother took his two children, Boussad, the eldest, and himself; she left her husband's village to join the hamlet from which she came, Ighil Bwammas, a short distance away. The family of the maternal uncles being itself very poor, the young Amirouche had to learn from an early age to make himself useful in order to survive and, if necessary, to help his mother and his brother, who was three years older than him. In the region, it is customary for boys whose parents have died or are particularly poor to serve in the homes of wealthier families, where they are fed in exchange for assistance bordering on servitude. In this way, people may spend their lives in a form of perpetual servitude, with no guarantee other than that they will be given their daily rations. This status is called 'acrik', which is equivalent to that of the serf in medieval Europe. This was the fate of Amirouche Aït Hamouda from his early childhood. However, he succeeded in getting an education while carrying out his numerous and arduous tasks. These few years at school were decisive in his life: he learned to read and write and developed a capacity for listening that enabled him to satisfy his curious mind all his life .
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Original: Belaïd Abrika (  born December 10, 1969 in Tizi Ouzou) is a professor of History at the Mouloud Mammeri University of Tizi-Ouzou.
Revised: Belaïd Abrika ( , born December 10, 1969 in Tizi Ouzou) is a professor of History at the Mouloud Mammeri University of Tizi-Ouzou.
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Original:  His favourite child was named KarlWright , Looming Tower, (2006), p.333-4
Revised:  Wright , Looming Tower, (2006), p.333-4
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Original: Osama bin Laden, a militant and founder of al Qaeda in 1988,Michael Scheuer, Through Our Enemies' Eyes, p. 110 believed Muslims should kill civilians and military personnel from the United States and allied countries until they withdrew support for Israel and withdrew military forces from Islamic countries.
Revised: Osama peen Laden, a militant and founder of al Qaeda in 1988,Michael Scheuer, Through Our Enemies' Eyes, p. 110 believed Muslims should kill civilians and military personnel from the United States and allied countries until they withdrew support for Israel and withdrew military forces from Islamic countries.
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Original:  First he watched the Iranian Revolution, in which Ayatollah Khomieini overthrew Iran’s Western supported government to install an Islamist state.
Revised:  First he watched the Iranian Revolution, in which Ayatollah Khomeini overthrew Iran’s Western supported government to install an Islamist state.
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Original:  BIN LADEN'S FATWA He was indicted in United States federal court for his involvement in the 1998 U.S. embassy bombings in Dar es Salaam Tanzania and Nairobi, Kenya, and was on the U.S. Federal Bureau of Investigation's Ten Most Wanted Fugitives list.
Revised:  He was indicted in United States federal court for his involvement in the 1998 U.S. embassy bombings in Dar es Salaam Tanzania and Nairobi, Kenya, and was on the U.S. Federal Bureau of Investigation's Ten Most Wanted Fugitives list.
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Original: Education and politicization Brummana High School, circa 1886 – According to some former administrators and students, Osama bin Laden attended Brummana for less than one year Osama bin Laden was raised as a devout Sunni Muslim.
Revised: Education and politicization Osama bin Laden was raised as a devout Sunni Muslim.
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Original:  Decoteau competed in the 5,000 metre race at the 1912 Summer Olympics in Stockholm, Sweden  serving as the only representative from Alberta on the Canadian Olympic team.
Revised:  Decoteau competed in the 5,000 metre race at the 1912 Summer Olympics in Stockholm, Sweden , serving as the only representative from Alberta on the Canadian Olympic team.
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Original:   Decoteau competed in the 5,000 metre race at the 1912 Summer Olympics in Stockholm, Sweden, serving as the only representative from Alberta on the Canadian Olympic team.
Revised:  FART Decoteau competed in the 5,000 metre race at the 1912 Summer Olympics in Stockholm, Sweden, serving as the only representative from Alberta on the Canadian Olympic team.
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Original: Alexander Wuttunee "Alex" Decoteau (November 19, 1887 – October 30, 1917), was a Cree Canadian track and field athlete, police officer and soldier.
Revised: Alexander Wuttunee Decoteau (November 19, 1887 – October 30, 1917), was a Cree Canadian track and field athlete, police officer and soldier.
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Original: Biography Decoteau was born on the Red Pheasant Indian Reserve in the District of Saskatchewan on November 19, 1887.
Revised: Biography Decoteau was born on the Red Pheasant Indigenous Reserve in the District of Saskatchewan on November 19, 1887.
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Original:  His father, who fought alongside Plains Cree Chief Pîhtokahanapiwiyin (Poundmaker) at Battle of Cut Knife in 1885, was an employee of the Indian Department when he was murdered in 1891.
Revised:  His father, who fought alongside Plains Cree Chief Pîhtokahanapiwiyin (Poundmaker) at Battle of Cut Knife in 1885, was an employee of the Indigenous Department when he was murdered in 1891.
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Original: Biography Decoteau was born on the Red Pheasant Indigenous Reserve in the District of Saskatchewan on November 19, 1887.
Revised: Biography Decoteau was born on the Red Pheasant Indian Reserve in the District of Saskatchewan on November 19, 1887.
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Original:  His father, who fought alongside Plains Cree Chief Pîhtokahanapiwiyin (Poundmaker) at Battle of Cut Knife in 1885, was an employee of the Indigenous Department when he was murdered in 1891.
Revised:  His father, who fought alongside Plains Cree Chief Pîhtokahanapiwiyin (Poundmaker) at Battle of Cut Knife in 1885, was an employee of the Indian Department when he was murdered in 1891.
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Original:  He shipped from Halifax on November 24, 1916, aboard SS Mauretania .
Revised:  He shipped from Halifax on November 24, 1916, aboard .
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Original:  Decoteau continued to run  while stationed abroad  participating in at least two military personnel athletic competitions.
Revised:  Decoteau continued to run competitively while stationed abroad participating in at least two military personnel athletic competitions.
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Original:  Decoteau continued to run  while stationed abroad  participating in at least two military personnel athletic competitions.
Revised:  Decoteau continued to run while stationed abroad , participating in at least two military personnel athletic competitions.
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Original:  At an event in Salisbury, George V, King of England, awarded Decoteau his personal gold pocket watch as congratulations for winning a 5-mile race.
Revised:  At an event in Salisbury, King George V awarded Decoteau his personal gold pocket watch as congratulations for winning a 5-mile race.
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Original:  At an event in Salisbury, George V, King of England, awarded Decoteau his personal gold pocket watch as congratulations for winning a 5-mile race.
Revised:  At an event in Salisbury, George V, King of England, awarded Decoteau his personal gold pocket watch as congratulations for winning a race.
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Original:  On May 27, 1917, Decoteau , was sent to France along with the other members of the 49th Battalion.
Revised:  On May 27, 1917, Decoteau was sent to France along with the other members of the 49th Battalion.
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