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Original: ADult life In 1729, he was commander of the Nouveau Commerçant, a ship involved in the trade between Louisbourg and Isle Saint-Jean and supplied the garrison at Louisbourg with firewood.
Revised: Adult life In 1729, he was commander of the Nouveau Commerçant, a ship involved in the trade between Louisbourg and Isle Saint-Jean and supplied the garrison at Louisbourg with firewood.
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Original:  Dugas died at Saint-Servan in January the following year. 
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Original: Joseph Dugas (1714 – January 11, 1779) was a merchant, privateer and militia officer of Acadian descent.
Revised: Joseph Dugas (1714 January 11, 1779) was a merchant, privateer and militia officer of Acadian descent.
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Original: Occupational epidemiology is one of the sub-disciplines of epidemiology that focus on investigations on workers and the workplace.
Revised: Occupational epidemiology is a subdiscipline of epidemiology that focuses on investigations of workers and the workplace.
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Original:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers  and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
Revised:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine health outcomes among workers and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
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Original:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers  and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
Revised:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers , and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
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Original:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers  and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
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Original:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers  and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
Revised:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace including noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
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Original:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers  and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
Revised:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, or radiation, or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
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Original:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers  and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization (schedules, etc. ).
Revised:  Occupational epidemiologic studies examine a variety of health outcomes among workers and their potential association with a variety of conditions in the workplace (such as noise, chemicals, heat, radiation, etc.) or work organization such as schedules.
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Original:  The need for evidence to inform occupational safety regulations, workers' compensation programs, and federal safety legislation constituted part of the motivation for the development of public health policy, occupational epidemiology methods, surveillance mechanisms and the delineation of the scope of this area of knowledge .
Revised:  The need for evidence to inform occupational safety regulations, workers' compensation programs, and safety legislation motivated the development of public health policy, occupational epidemiology methods, surveillance mechanisms and the delineation of the scope of this area of knowledge .
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Original:  The need for evidence to inform occupational safety regulations, workers' compensation programs, and federal safety legislation constituted part of the motivation for the development of public health policy, occupational epidemiology methods, surveillance mechanisms and the delineation of the scope of this area of knowledge .
Revised:  The need for evidence to inform occupational safety regulations, workers' compensation programs, and federal safety legislation constituted part of the motivation for the development of public health policy, occupational epidemiology methods, and surveillance mechanisms .
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Original:  References Category:Epidemiology Category:Occupational safety and health Category:Public health Category:Surveillan
Revised:  Category:Epidemiology Category:Occupational safety and health Category:Public health Category:Surveillan
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Original:  Other examples include like cancer among chimney sweeps, asbestos-related diseases, and the variety of occupational diseases found among factory workers in the early 1900's.
Revised:  Other examples include cancer among chimney sweeps, asbestos-related diseases, and the variety of occupational diseases found among factory workers in the early 1900's.
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Original:  For example, Hippocrates recommended other physicians consider patients' vocational backgrounds when diagnosing and treating disease, and Bernardino Ramazzini in 1700 outlined many occupational diseases in his book De Morbis Artificum.
Revised:  For example, Hippocrates recommended other physicians consider patients' vocational backgrounds when diagnosing and treating disease, and Bernardino Ramazzini in 1700 outlined many occupational ses in his book De Morbis Artificum.
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Original:  For example, Hippocrates recommended other physicians consider patients' vocational backgrounds when diagnosing and treating disease, and Bernardino Ramazzini in 1700 outlined many occupational ses in his book De Morbis Artificum.
Revised:  For Hippocrates recommended other physicians consider patients' vocational backgrounds when diagnosing and treating disease, and Bernardino Ramazzini in 1700 outlined many occupational ses in his book De Morbis Artificum.
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Original: Agriculture They were promoted by the development of a varied agriculture (bean, cocoa, chili pepper, etc.) and had big irrigation systems  which guaranteed a suitable production for his numerous populations.
Revised: Agriculture They were promoted by the development of a varied agriculture (bean, cocoa, chili pepper, etc.) and had big irrigation systems , which guaranteed a suitable production for his numerous populations.
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Original: Agriculture They were promoted by the development of a varied agriculture (bean, cocoa, chili pepper, etc.) and had big irrigation systems  which guaranteed a suitable production for his numerous populations.
Revised: Agriculture They were promoted by the development of a varied agriculture (bean, cocoa, chili pepper, etc.) and had big irrigation systems which guaranteed a suitable production for its numerous populations.
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Original:  Arts They developed techniques of great sophistication in fabrics and the ceramics.
Revised:  Arts They developed techniques of great sophistication in fabrics and ceramics.
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Original:  At the arrival of the Spaniards, they were established in the territory that today comprise the Republics of El Salvador and Honduras."
Revised:  At the arrival of the Spaniards, they were established in the territory that today comprises of the Republics of El Salvador and Honduras."
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Original:  The area maya comprises what in our days are the countries of Honduras, Guatemala, El Salvador and Mexico.
Revised:  The Maya area consists of what in our days are the countries of Honduras, Guatemala, El Salvador and Mexico.
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Original:  After the fall of the Aztec empire in 1521 with the victory of Hernan Cortes and his allies, Gil González Dávila became the first Spaniard to arrive in Honduras for conquest purposes.
Revised:  After the fall of the Aztec empire in 1521 with the victory of Hernán Cortés and his allies, Gil González Dávila became the first Spaniard to arrive in Honduras for conquest purposes.
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Original:  URL URL Advocates of ITT point out that it is also simpler than other forms of study design and analysis because it does not require observation of compliance status for units assigned to different treatments or incorporation of compliance into the analysis.
Revised:  URL URL ITT is also simpler than other forms of study design and analysis because it does not require observation of compliance status for units assigned to different treatments or incorporation of compliance into the analysis.
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Original:  For the purposes of ITT analysis, everyone who is randomized in the trial is considered to be part of the trial regardless of whether he or she is dosed or completes the trial.
Revised:  In other words, for the purposes of ITT analysis, everyone who is randomized in the trial is considered to be part of the trial regardless of whether he or she is dosed or completes the trial.
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Original:  ITT is also simpler than other forms of study design and analysis  because it does not require observation of compliance status for units assigned to different treatments or incorporation of compliance into the analysis.
Revised:  ITT is also simpler than other forms of study design and analysis , because it does not require observation of compliance status for units assigned to different treatments or incorporation of compliance into the analysis.
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Original: An intention-to-treat (ITT) analysis of the results of an experiment is based on the initial treatment assignment and not on the treatment eventually received.
Revised: In medicine an intention-to-treat (ITT) analysis of the results of an experiment is based on the initial treatment assignment and not on the treatment eventually received.
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Original: Vice-Admiral Syed Arifullah Hussaini (Urdu:سيد عارف الله حسينى;
Revised: Vice admiral Syed Arifullah Hussaini (Urdu:سيد عارف الله حسينى;
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Original:  b. 23 April 1961) , also known as S.A. Hussaini, is a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy, and a senior fleet commander serving as the Commander of Pakistan Fleet, appointed in this command assignment on 14 June 2016.
Revised:  b. 23 April 1961) , also known as S.A. Hussaini, was a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy, and a senior fleet commander serving as the Commander of Pakistan Fleet, appointed in this command assignment on 14 June 2016.
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Original:  b. 23 April 1961) , also known as S.A. Hussaini, was a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy, and a senior fleet commander serving as the Commander of Pakistan Fleet, appointed in this command assignment on 14 June 2016.
Revised:  b. 23 April 1961) , also known as S.A. Hussaini, was a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy, and a senior fleet commander serving as the Commander , Pakistan Fleet, appointed in this command assignment on 14 June 2016.
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Original:  b. 23 April 1961 ) , also known as S.A. Hussaini, was a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy , and a senior fleet commander serving as the Commander, Pakistan Fleet , appointed in this command assignment on 14 June 2016.
Revised:  b. 23 April 1961 ) , also known as S.A. Hussaini, was a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy . He also served as the Commander, Pakistan Fleet , appointed in this command assignment on 14 June 2016.
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Original:  b. 23 April 1961 ) , also known as S.A. Hussaini, was a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy , and a senior fleet commander serving as the Commander, Pakistan Fleet , appointed in this command assignment on 14 June 2016.
Revised:  b. 23 April 1961 ) , also known as S.A. Hussaini, was a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy , and a senior fleet commander serving as the Commander, Pakistan Fleet in 14 June 2016.
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Original: In statistics, the Cuzick–Edwards test* is a significance test whose aim is to detect the possible clustering of sub-populations within a clustered or non-uniformly-spread overall population.
Revised: In statistics, the Cuzick–Edwards test is a significance test whose aim is to detect the possible clustering of sub-populations within a clustered or non-uniformly-spread overall population.
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Original:  Possible applications of the test include examining the spatial clustering of childhood leukaemia and lymphoma within the general population, given that the general population is spatially clustered.
Revised:  Possible applications of the test include examining the spatial clustering of childhood leukemia and lymphoma within the general population, given that the general population is spatially clustered.
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Original:  the number "cases" which are nearer to each given case than the k'th nearest "control" for that case.
Revised:  the number "cases" which are nearer to each given case than the k-th nearest "control" for that case.
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Original:  He concurrently serves as the Member of Parliament representing Oyyam County North in the 10th Parliament (2016 - 2021).
Revised:  He concurrently serves as the Member of Parliament representing Oyam County North in the 10th Parliament (2016 - 2021).
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Original:  According to his profile at the website of Uganda's parliament, he obtained his High School Diploma from Soroti Secondary School, in the city of Sorti , in he Eastern Region of Uganda.
Revised:  According to his profile at the website of Uganda's parliament, he obtained his High School Diploma from Soroti Secondary School, in the city of Soroti , in he Eastern Region of Uganda.
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Original: During the 2006 national election cycle, Engola successfully contested for the Local Council 5 (LCV), Oyam District Local Council Chairmanship, on the ruling NRM political party ticket.
Revised: During the 2006 national election cycle, Engola successfully contested for the Local Council 5 (LCV), Oyam District Council Chairmanship, on the ruling NRM political party ticket.
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Original: Charles Okello Macodwogo Engola, (born 12 October 1958), commonly known as Charles Engola , is a Ugandan politician and retired colonel in the Uganda People's Defence Force.
Revised: Charles Okello Macodwogo Engola, (born 12 October 1958), commonly known as Charles Engola , is a Ugandan politician and retired Colonel in the Uganda People's Defence Force.
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Original:  Charles Okello Engola is also the grandson of Rwot Olong Adilo who succeeded is father Rwot Olwa Abelli of Iceme.
Revised:  Charles Okello-Engola is also the grandson of Rwot Olong Adilo who succeeded is father Rwot Olwa Abelli of Iceme.
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Original:  Charles Okello Engola is also the grandson of Rwot Olong Adilo who succeeded is father Rwot Olwa Abelli of Iceme.
Revised:  Charles Okello Engola is also the grandson of Rwot Olong Adilo , and also great grandson of Rwot Olwa Abelli of Iceme.
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Original:  He concurrently serves as the Member of Parliament representing Oyam County North in the 10th Parliament (2016 - 2021).
Revised:  He concurrently serves as the Member of Parliament representing Oyam North County in the 10th Parliament (2016 - 2021).
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Original:  Kiyamba's royal edicts have been found in the script in a stone inscription at Khoibu in Tengnoupal district .
Revised:  Kiyamba's royal edicts have been found in the script in a stone inscription at Khoibu in Tengnoupal District .
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Original: Medingu Senbi Kiyamba ( 1467-1508 ) was ruler of Meeteileipak, now named Manipur.
Revised: Medingu Senbi Kiyamba ( 1467–1508 ) was ruler of Meeteileipak, now named Manipur.
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Original:  +VariableDescriptionMale umemploymentThe proportion of economically active males seeking or waiting to start work.
Revised:  +VariableDescriptionMale unemploymentThe proportion of economically active males seeking or waiting to start work.
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Original: Developed by Carstairs and Morris (1991), the Carstairs index is an index of deprivation used in spatial epidemiology to identify Socio-economic confounding.
Revised: The Carstairs index is an index of deprivation used in spatial epidemiology to identify Socio-economic confounding.
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Original:  Developed for Scotlandit was an alternative to the Townsend Index of deprivation to avoid the use of households as denominatorsElliott P, Cuzick J, English D, Stern R. Geographical and Environmental Epidemiology.
Revised:  Developed for Scotlandit was an alternative to the Townsend Index of deprivation to avoid the use of households as denominators.Elliott P, Cuzick J, English D, Stern R. Geographical and Environmental Epidemiology.
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Original:  New York, 1997.
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Original:  In the 1981, 1991 and 2001 indices, quintile 1 represented the least URL deprived areas, and quintile 5, represented the most deprived.
Revised:  In the 1981, 1991 and 2001 indices, quintile 1 represented the least deprived areas, and quintile 5, represented the most deprived.
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Original:  In 1919 the interests of the PPC  were acquired by the the governments of the United Kingdom, Australia and New Zealand, which carried out mining under the direction of the British Phosphate Commissioners . Post B.P.C. Mining In  1981, the Phosphate Mining Company of Christmas Island (PMCI), a government company , took over mining operations .
Revised:  In 1919 the interests of the PPC were acquired by the governments of the United Kingdom, Australia and New Zealand, which carried out mining under the direction of the British Phosphate Commissioners . Post B.P.C. Mining In 1981, the Phosphate Mining Company of Christmas Island (PMCI), a government company , took over mining operations .
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Original:  In 1919 the interests of the PPC  were acquired by the the governments of the United Kingdom, Australia and New Zealand, which carried out mining under the direction of the British Phosphate Commissioners . Post B.P.C. Mining In  1981, the Phosphate Mining Company of Christmas Island (PMCI), a government company , took over mining operations .
Revised:  In 1919 the interests of the PPC were acquired by the the governments of the United Kingdom, Australia and New Zealand, which carried out mining under the direction of the British Phosphate Commissioners . Post B.P.C. Mining In 1981, the Phosphate Mining Company of Christmas Island (PMCI), a company established and controlled by the Australian Government , took over mining operations .
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Original:  In 1919 the interests of the PPC  were acquired by the the governments of the United Kingdom, Australia and New Zealand, which carried out mining under the direction of the British Phosphate Commissioners . Post B.P.C. Mining In  1981, the Phosphate Mining Company of Christmas Island (PMCI), a government company , took over mining operations .
Revised:  In 1919 the interests of the PPC were acquired by the the governments of the United Kingdom, Australia and New Zealand, which carried out mining under the direction of the British Phosphate Commissioners . Post B.P.C. Mining In 1981, the Phosphate Mining Company of Christmas Island (PMCI), a government company , took over mining operations 
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Original:  After more than a decade, the case finally came to an end, with the Banabans only being awarded £1 and were still made to pay their own legal fees of more than ₤ 300,000.
Revised:  After more than a decade, the case finally came to an end, with the Banabans only being awarded £1 and were still made to pay their own legal fees of more than £ 300,000.
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Original:  Ocean Island and Nauru - their story.
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Original:  The Award examines each technology for breakthrough potential in terms of technological URL environmental impact, and financial feasibility with CAAC’s standardized technology assessment URL The award selection committee consists of technical professionals, industrial experts and testing specialists that are chosen every year to fit each year’s award categories.
Revised:  The Award examines each technology for breakthrough potential in terms of technological performance, environmental impact, and financial feasibility with CAAC’s standardized technology assessment URL The award selection committee consists of technical professionals, industrial experts and testing specialists that are chosen every year to fit each year’s award categories.
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Original:  Technologies from around the world are eligible to URL
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Original:  The Award examines each technology for breakthrough potential in terms of technological performance, environmental impact, and financial feasibility with CAAC’s standardized technology assessment URL The award selection committee consists of technical professionals, industrial experts and testing specialists that are chosen every year to fit each year’s award categories.
Revised:  The Award examines each technology for breakthrough potential in terms of technological performance, environmental impact, and financial feasibility with CAAC’s standardized technology assessment methodology. The award selection committee consists of technical professionals, industrial experts and testing specialists that are chosen every year to fit each year’s award categories.
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Original: The Bluetech International Clean Air Technology Award (also called Bluetech Award), is an annual award presented by the Clean Air Alliance of China (CAAC) to recognize outstanding technologies that prevent and control different forms and sources of air pollution.
Revised: The Bluetech International Clean Air Technology Award (also called Bluetech Award), is an annual award presented by the Clean Air Alliance of China (CAAC) to recognise outstanding technologies that prevent and control different forms and sources of air pollution.
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Original:  The award examines each technology for breakthrough potential in terms of technological performance, environmental impact, and financial feasibility with CAAC's standardized technology assessment methodology.
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