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Original:  Specifically in mice, Epo demonstrated protective effects on nigral dopaminergic neurons in a mouse model of Parkinson ’ s Disease.
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Original:  This recent experiment tested the hypothesis that RhEpo could protect dopaminergic neurons and improve the neurobehavioral outcome in a rat model of Parkinson ’ s Disease.
Revised:  This recent experiment tested the hypothesis that RhEpo could protect dopaminergic neurons and improve the neurobehavioral outcome in a rat model of Parkinson ' s Disease.
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Original:  These experiments demonstrated that intrastriatal administration of RhEpo can protect nigral dopaminergic neurons from 6-OHDA induced cell death and improve neurobehavioral outcome in a rat model of Parkinson ’ s Disease.
Revised:  These experiments demonstrated that intrastriatal administration of RhEpo can protect nigral dopaminergic neurons from 6-OHDA induced cell death and improve neurobehavioral outcome in a rat model of Parkinson ' s Disease.
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Original: Dopaminergic neurons Epo was shown to specifically protect dopaminergic neurons, which are closely tied in to attention deficit hyperactivity disorder.
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Original: It should also be noted that quite a bit of research emphasis is on non erythropoietic but, neuroprotective Peptides of Erythropoietin.
Revised: Quite a bit of research emphasis is on non erythropoietic but, neuroprotective Peptides of Erythropoietin.
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Original: Chen Yi () (born April 4, 1953) is a Chinese-American  composer of contemporary classical music as well as a violinist .
Revised: Chen Yi () (born April 4, 1953) is a Chinese-American composer of contemporary classical music .
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Original:  When parents are empowered they become active lifelong participants in their child’s education Brenda Mendoza, September 2010, URL Overview Comprehensive family literacy services provide a holistic, fully integrated, family-focused approach, providing parents and children most in need of improving their literacy skills with intensive, frequent, and long-term educational and non-educational services.
Revised:  When parents are empowered they become active lifelong participants in their child’s education URL Overview Comprehensive family literacy services provide a holistic, fully integrated, family-focused approach, providing parents and children most in need of improving their literacy skills with intensive, frequent, and long-term educational and non-educational services.
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Original:  P.A.L. was implemented district wide in 2013. P.A.L. is also in other districts throughout URL F.R.E.D.
Revised:  P.A.L. was implemented district wide in 2013. P.A.L. is also in other districts throughout Illinois. F.R.E.D.
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Original:  References URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See Also Barbara Bush Foundation for Family Literacy  External links The National Center for Family Literacy Family Literacy Program - Be a P.A.L. 
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Original:  References URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See Also Barbara Bush Foundation for Family Literacy  External links The National Center for Family Literacy Family Literacy Program - Be a P.A.L. 
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Original:  References URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See Also Barbara Bush Foundation for Family Literacy  External links The National Center for Family Literacy Family Literacy Program - Be a P.A.L. 
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Original:  When parents are empowered they become active lifelong participants in their child’s education URL Overview Comprehensive family literacy services provide a holistic, fully integrated, family-focused approach, providing parents and children most in need of improving their literacy skills with intensive, frequent, and long-term educational and non-educational services.
Revised:  When parents are empowered they become active lifelong participants in their child’s education Overview Comprehensive family literacy services provide a holistic, fully integrated, family-focused approach, providing parents and children most in need of improving their literacy skills with intensive, frequent, and long-term educational and non-educational services.
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Original:  In this program, fathers or father figures such as grandparents, uncles, or family friends are encouraged to read to their children every day for 4 weeks.
Revised:  In this program, fathers or father figures such as grandparents, uncles, or family friends are encouraged to read to their children every day for four weeks.
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Original:   Childhood Education: Helping to involve parents can be done in a child's learning through play groups, sharing stories and books together, and child-directed play time that all help the child to bond with their parents.
Revised:  Building Family: The Leadership Program’s nationally recognized Building Family program invites parents into school communities with workshops that are hands-on, informative, and fun. These successful workshops meet a wide variety of parent needs and interests: from personal health and professional growth to nurturing the creative spirit and parenting strategies for promoting children’s academic achievement. Backed by The Leadership Program’s decades of experience facilitating more than 2,000 Building Family workshops for over 20,000 public school parents, this inspiring guidebook includes thirty-three complete workshops with convenient step-by-step instructions. Use it to lead dynamic experiences that will inspire enduring parent engagement in your own school community. Childhood Education: Helping to involve parents can be done in a child's learning through play groups, sharing stories and books together, and child-directed play time that all help the child to bond with their parents.
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Original: The lifelong romance between himself and his wife forms the subject of If Ever Two Were One, a collection of his correspondence and diary entries.
Revised: His lifelong romance with his wife forms the subject of If Ever Two Were One, a collection of his correspondence and diary entries.
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Original:  It is believed that his son, Nahalum will take his place at a stage.
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Original: 20th century Year Date Event  22 April 1918 Transcaucasian Democratic Federative Republic established.
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Original: 20th century Year Date Event  22 April 1918 Transcaucasian Democratic Federative Republic established.
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Original:   28 May 1918 Transcaucasian Democratic Federative Republic disestablished.
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Original:   28 May 1918 Transcaucasian Democratic Federative Republic disestablished.
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Original:   26 May 1918 Democratic Republic of Georgia established.
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Original:   26 May 1918 Democratic Republic of Georgia established.
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Original:   25 February 1921 Democratic Republic of Georgia annexed by the Bolshevik forces of the Soviet Union, following an invasion which begin 14 days earlier on the 11th.
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Original:   25 February 1921 Democratic Republic of Georgia annexed by the Bolshevik forces of the Soviet Union, following an invasion which begin 14 days earlier on the 11th.
Revised:  25 February Democratic Republic of Georgia annexed by the Bolshevik forces of the Soviet Union, following an invasion which begin 14 days earlier on the 11th.
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Original:   14 April 1978 A wave of demonstrations were held in Tbilisi to protest adopting a new constitution of the Soviet Georgia, no longer declaring Georgian to be the sole state language.
Revised:  1978 14 April 1978 A wave of demonstrations were held in Tbilisi to protest adopting a new constitution of the Soviet Georgia, no longer declaring Georgian to be the sole state language.
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Original:   14 April 1978 A wave of demonstrations were held in Tbilisi to protest adopting a new constitution of the Soviet Georgia, no longer declaring Georgian to be the sole state language.
Revised:  14 April A wave of demonstrations were held in Tbilisi to protest adopting a new constitution of the Soviet Georgia, no longer declaring Georgian to be the sole state language.
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Original:  The Kingdom of Colchis, which existed from the 6th to the 1st centuries BC is regarded as another Georgian state and the term Colchians was used as the collective term for tribes which populated the eastern coast of the Black Sea. Colchis was populated by Colchians, an early Lazuri speaking tribe, ancestral to the contemporary Western Georgians, namely Svans and Mingrelians, as well as the related Lazs. 
Revised:  The Kingdom of Colchis, which existed from the 6th to the 1st centuries BC is regarded as another Georgian state and the term Colchians was used as the collective term for tribes which populated the eastern coast of the Black Sea. Colchis was populated by Colchians, an early Lazuri speaking tribe, ancestral to the contemporary Western Georgians, namely Svans and Mingrelians, as well as the related Lazs. Hello
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Original: This artificial amplification increased resistance to rupturing of parchment.
Revised: This artificial amplification increased resistance against rupturing of parchment.
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Original:  The duplication had to be cut through so the cord or vellum strip could be stretched through.
Revised:  The duplication had to be cut through so the cord or seal strip could be stretched through.
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Original: File:Listina Karel IV.jpg|Plica on the deed of Charles IV.]] Plica (from Latin plica - fold) is a term from sigillography for the amplification (duplication) of the lower edge of the deed, which was caused by folding the parchment.
Revised: File:Listina Karel IV.jpg|Plica on the deed of Charles IV.]] Plica (from Latin plica - fold) is a term from sigillography for the reinforcement of the lower edge of the deed, which was caused by folding the parchment.
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Original:  President of France) Biniamin Nethaniahu (Prime Minister of Israel) Joseph Goebbels (Nazi Propaganda Minister) Adolf Hitler (Führer of Nazi Germany) Douglas MacArthur (Supreme Commander of the Japanese occupation) -
Revised:  President of France) Joseph Goebbels (Nazi Propaganda Minister) Adolf Hitler (Führer of Nazi Germany) Douglas MacArthur (Supreme Commander of the Japanese occupation) -
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Original: Orators The following are, by necessity, those who have been noted as famous specifically for their oratory abilities, or for a particularly famous speech or speeches.
Revised: Orators The following is a list of those who have been noted as famous specifically for their oratory abilities, or for a particularly famous speech or speeches.
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Original:  Most religious leaders and politicians (by nature of their office) may perform many speeches, as may those who support or oppose a particular issue.
Revised:  Most religious leaders and politicians (by nature of their office) may give many speeches, as may those who support or oppose a particular issue.
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Original:  To include them all would be prohibitive .
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Original:  Malcolm X - The Ballot or the Bullet Nelson Mandela - I Am Prepared to Die Presidents of the United States Abraham Lincoln - Gettysburg address John F. Kennedy - Inaugural Address Richard M. Nixon (while US Vice-President) - Checkers speech Ronald Reagan - First Inaugural Address;
Revised:  Malcolm X - The Ballot or the Bullet Nelson Mandela - I Am Prepared to Die Presidents of the United States Abraham Lincoln - Gettysburg address John F. Kennedy - Inaugural Address Richard M. Nixon - Checkers speech (while Vice-President) - Checkers speech Ronald Reagan - First Inaugural Address;
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Original:  Malcolm X - The Ballot or the Bullet Nelson Mandela - I Am Prepared to Die Presidents of the United States Abraham Lincoln - Gettysburg address John F. Kennedy - Inaugural Address Richard M. Nixon (while US Vice-President) - Checkers speech Ronald Reagan - First Inaugural Address;
Revised:  Malcolm X - The Ballot or the Bullet Nelson Mandela - I Am Prepared to Die Presidents of the United States Abraham Lincoln - Gettysburg address John F. Kennedy - Inaugural Address Richard M. Nixon (while US Vice-President) Ronald Reagan - First Inaugural Address;
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Original:  Martin Luther King , Jr. - I Have A Dream Sojourner TruthAfrican American Orators: A Bio-Critical Sourcebook, edited by Richard W. Leeman, Greenwood Publishing Group, 1996. - Ain't I a Woman?
Revised:  Martin Luther King Jr. - I Have A Dream Sojourner TruthAfrican American Orators: A Bio-Critical Sourcebook, edited by Richard W. Leeman, Greenwood Publishing Group, 1996. - Ain't I a Woman?
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Original:  Cicero Corax of Syracuse Gaius Scribonius Curio  Gorgias Hegesippus, Athenian Julius Caesar, Roman dictator Licinius Macer Calvus, Roman poet and orator Marcus Antonius (orator), Roman Nicetas of Smyrna, 1st century AD, Greek sophist and orator Pericles, Athenian statesman Quintilian Quintus Hortensius John Chrysostom (literally golden-mouthed), Christian preacher
Revised:  Cicero Corax of Syracuse Gaius Scribonius Curio Gorgias Hegesippus, Athenian Julius Caesar, Roman dictator Licinius Macer Calvus, Roman poet and orator Marcus Antonius (orator), Roman Pericles, Athenian statesman Quintilian Quintus Hortensius John Chrysostom (literally golden-mouthed), Christian preacher
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Original:  In the Extraordinary Provincial Synod Meeting held in Kota Kinabalu, Sabah on the 21–23 September 2011, he was elected as the Archbishop elect of the Province of South East Asia and was installed on 12 February 2012 at St.
Revised:  In the Extraordinary Provincial Synod Meeting held in Kota Kinabalu, Sabah , Malaysia on the 21st to the of 23rd September 2011, he was elected as the Archbishop elect of the Province of South East Asia and was installed on 12 February 2012 at St.
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Original:  Boniface in Mamut near Miri.
Revised:  Boniface in Mamut , located in the rural part of Miri.
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Original: In 1972, Bolly began his theological training at the House of  Epiphany, the theological seminary of the Diocese of Kuching, graduating with a Diploma in Theology in 1974.
Revised: In 1972, Bolly began his theological training at the House of the Epiphany, the theological seminary of the Diocese of Kuching, graduating with a Diploma in Theology in 1974.
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Original: Titles, styles and honours Titles and styles 25 October 1814 – 21 September 1824: His Serene Highness The Duke of Nemours 21 September 1824 – 26 June 1896: His Royal Highness The Duke of Nemours Honours Kingdom of France: Knight of the Holy Spirit, 19 February 1829 Knight of St.
Revised:  Honours Kingdom of France: Knight of the Holy Spirit, 19 February 1829 Knight of St.
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Original:  At twelve years of age he was nominated colonel of the first regiment of chasseurs , and in 1830 entered the Chambre des Pairs.
Revised:  At twelve years of age he was nominated colonel of the First Regiment of Chasseurs , and in 1830 entered the Chambre des Pairs.
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Original:  As early as 1825 his name was mentioned as a possible candidate for the throne of Greece, and in February 1831 he was nominated king of the Belgians , but international considerations deterred Louis-Philippe from accepting the honour for his son , who was accompanying the French army that entered Belgium to support the new kingdom in its separation from the United Kingdom of the Netherlands;
Revised:  As early as 1825 his name was mentioned as a possible candidate for the throne of Greece, and in February 1831 he was nominated king of the Belgians ; international considerations deterred Louis-Philippe from accepting the honour for his son , who was accompanying the French army that entered Belgium to support the new kingdom in its separation from the United Kingdom of the Netherlands;
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Original:  As early as 1825 his name was mentioned as a possible candidate for the throne of Greece, and in February 1831 he was nominated king of the Belgians , but international considerations deterred Louis-Philippe from accepting the honour for his son , who was accompanying the French army that entered Belgium to support the new kingdom in its separation from the United Kingdom of the Netherlands;
Revised:  As early as 1825 his name was mentioned as a possible candidate for the throne of Greece, and in February 1831 he was nominated king of the Belgians , but international considerations deterred Louis-Philippe from accepting the honour for his son , who was accompanying the French army that entered Belgium to support its separation from the United Kingdom of the Netherlands;
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Original:  He accompanied the Algerian expedition against the town of Constantine in the autumn of 1836, and in a second expedition (1837) he was entrusted with the command of a brigade and with the direction of the siege operations before Constantine.
Revised:  Louis accompanied the Algerian expedition against the town of Constantine in the autumn of 1836, and in a second expedition (1837) he was entrusted with the command of a brigade and with the direction of the siege operations before Constantine.
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Original:  He accompanied the Algerian expedition against the town of Constantine in the autumn of 1836, and in a second expedition (1837) he was entrusted with the command of a brigade and with the direction of the siege operations before Constantine.
Revised:  He accompanied the Algerian expedition against the town of Constantine in the autumn of 1836, and in a second expedition (1837) he was entrusted with the command of a brigade and with the direction of the siege operations at Constantine.
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Original:  General Damrémont was killed at his side on 12 October, and the place was taken by assault on the 13th.
Revised:  General Damrémont was killed at his side on 12 October, and Constantine was taken by assault on the 13th.
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Original:  In the expedition against the fortified town of Takdempt he commanded the 1st infantry division .
Revised:  In the expedition against the fortified town of Takdempt , Louis commanded the 1st infantry division .
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Original:  In the expedition against the fortified town of Takdempt he commanded the 1st infantry division .
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Original:  He had been employed on missions of courtesy to England in 1835, in 1838 and in 1845, and to Berlin and Vienna in 1836.
Revised:  Louis was also dispatched on missions of courtesy to England in 1835, in 1838 and in 1845, and to Berlin and Vienna in 1836.
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Original: Prince Louis of Orleans , Duke of Nemours (Louis Charles Philippe Raphaël d'Orléans;
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Original:  At twelve years of age  he was nominated colonel of the First Regiment of Chasseurs, and in 1830 entered the Chambre des Pairs.
Revised:  At twelve years of age , he was nominated colonel of the First Regiment of Chasseurs, and in 1830 entered the Chambre des Pairs.
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Original:  Nuchal cords are typically checked for by running the finger over the babies neck once the head has delivered.
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Original: The diagnosis may be suspected if there is a decrease in the babies heart rate during delivery.
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Original:  Crawford commented "It is all the more remarkable, therefore, that little work has been done. .. to analyze its effects during labor and delivery".
Revised:  Crawford commented "It is all the more remarkable, therefore, that little work has been done. to analyze its effects during labor and delivery".
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Original: Influence Within one week of its publication, Forbes ' Jenna Goudreau noted that the book was featured by several major media outlets and was shared extensively across the Web, Goudreau observing that "readers said they felt validated and seen for the first time".
Revised: Influence Within one week of its publication, Forbes Jenna Goudreau noted that the book was featured by several major media outlets and was shared extensively across the Web, Goudreau observing that "readers said they felt validated and seen for the first time".
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Original: Personal relationships Cain has noted that people of different temperament who become involved in personal relationships —possibly drawn to one another by a sense that each completes the other— can encounter misunderstanding and conflict.
Revised: Personal relationships Cain has noted that people of different temperament who become involved in personal relationships can encounter misunderstanding and conflict.
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Original:  In contrast, traditional, pre-Americanized Asian culture is more inclined to value reticence and caution.
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Original:  Western societies, being based on the Greco-Roman ideal which praises oratory, favor the man of action over the man of wyyyf Dusyrdiyagrcontemplation , and view introversion as being between a disappointment and pathology.
Revised:  Western societies, being based on the Greco-Roman ideal which praises oratory, favor the man of action over the man of contemplation , and view introversion as being between a disappointment and pathology.
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Original: ]] For a more complete discussion, see the biographical article, Susan Cain.
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Original: After World War II and the collapse of Vietnam's monarchy, France attempted to re-establish its colonial rule  but was ultimately defeated in the First Indo-China War.
Revised: After World War II and the collapse of Vietnam's monarchy, France attempted to re-establish its colonial rule analytics but was ultimately defeated in the First Indo-China War.
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