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Original:  Biography A third-generation ethnic Korean, Kim was born on April 5, 1986 in Tashkent, Uzbekistan, in the USSR . He learned chess from his grandfather, Nikolay Vladimirovich Kim, who taught the game to Alexey when he was four .
Revised:  Biography A third-generation ethnic Korean, Kim was born on April 5, 1986 in Tashkent, Uzbekistan, in the Soviet Union . He learned chess from his grandfather, Nikolay Vladimirovich Kim, who taught the game to Alexey when he was four .
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Original:  Biography A third-generation ethnic Korean, Kim was born on April 5, 1986 in Tashkent, Uzbekistan, in the USSR . He learned chess from his grandfather, Nikolay Vladimirovich Kim, who taught the game to Alexey when he was four .
Revised:  Biography A third-generation ethnic Korean, Kim was born on April 5, 1986 in Tashkent, Uzbekistan, in the USSR . He learned chess from his grandfather, Nikolay Vladimirovich Kim, at four years old .
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Original:  He became an FIDE Master in 2000, an International Master in 2001, and a grandmaster in 2004.
Revised:  Kim became a FIDE master in 2000, an International Master in 2001, and a grandmaster in 2004.
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Original:  He became an FIDE Master in 2000, an International Master in 2001, and a grandmaster in 2004.
Revised:  He became an FIDE Master in 2000, an international master in 2001, and a grandmaster in 2004.
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Original:  Category:1986 births Category:Living people Category:Chess grandmasters Category:  People from Tashkent Category:Russian chess players Category:Soviet people of Korean descent Category:Soviet emigrants to South Korea Category:South Korean chess playe
Revised:  Category:1986 births Category:Living people Category:Chess grandmasters Category: People from Tashkent Category:Russian chess players Category:Soviet people of Korean descent Category:South Korean chess playe
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Original:  In 2006, he paid the required fee to the World Chess Federation (FIDE ) to switch his national federation to South Korea, in keeping with his grandfather's wishes.
Revised:  In 2006, he paid the required fee to FIDE (chess's international governing body ) to switch his national federation to South Korea, in keeping with his grandfather's wishes.
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Original: Contiguity in geography is the characteristic  of political or geographical land divisions, as a group, not being interrupted by other land or water.
Revised: Geographic contiguity is the characteristic of political or geographical land divisions, as a group, not being interrupted by other land or water.
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Original: Contiguity in geography is the characteristic  of political or geographical land divisions, as a group, not being interrupted by other land or water.
Revised: Contiguity in geography is the characteristic in geography of political or geographical land divisions, as a group, not being interrupted by other land or water.
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Original: title for the paragraph Training of simple reflexes in Aplysia has shown a strengthening between sensory and motor neurons responsible for those reflexes;
Revised: Biological processes Training of simple reflexes in Aplysia has shown a strengthening between sensory and motor neurons responsible for those reflexes;
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Original:  Biological processes Early LTP is best studied in the context of classical conditioning.
Revised:  LTP and classical conditioning Early LTP is best studied in the context of classical conditioning.
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Original: Early long-term potentiation Early long-term potentiation (E-LTP) is the first phase of long-term potentiation (LTP), a well-studied form of synaptic plasticity, and consists in an increase in synaptic strength.
Revised: Early long-term potentiation Early long-term potentiation (E-LTP) is the first phase of long-term potentiation (LTP), a well-studied form of synaptic plasticity, and consists of an increase in synaptic strength.
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Original:  LTP could be produced by repetitive stimulation of the presynaptic terminals, and it is believed to play a role in memory function in  hippocampus, amygdala and other cortical brain structures in mammals.
Revised:  LTP could be produced by repetitive stimulation of the presynaptic terminals, and it is believed to play a role in memory function in the hippocampus, amygdala and other cortical brain structures in mammals.
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Original:  A single train of high-frequency stimuli is needed to trigger E-LTP that begins right after the stimulation lasting few hours or less, and depending primarily on short-term kinase activity.
Revised:  A single train of high-frequency stimuli is needed to trigger E-LTP that begins right after the stimulation , lasting a few hours or less, and depending primarily on short-term kinase activity.
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Original:  In the transgenic mice, on the other hand, LTP induced by two trains decays faster than in wild-type mice, implying that excessive calcineurin activity suppresses both I-LTP and L-LTP.
Revised:  In the transgenic mice, on the other hand, LTP induced by two trains decayed faster than in wild-type mice, implying that excessive calcineurin activity suppresses both I-LTP and L-LTP.
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Original:  In the perforant and Schaffer pathways, LTP is induced by activating a postsynaptic NMDA receptor and influx of .
Revised:  In the perforant and Schaffer pathways, LTP is induced by activating a postsynaptic NMDA receptor , causing an influx of calcium .
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Original:  Whereas chronic stress is characterized by its negative impacts on the effect of learning and memory and furthermore can exacerbate a number of disorders including Alzheimer dementia (AD).
Revised:  Whereas chronic stress is characterized by its negative impacts on the effect of learning and memory and furthermore can exacerbate a number of disorders , including Alzheimer's disease (AD).
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Original:  While the area CA1 is vulnerable to stress and the combination stress/subAβ, the DG is remarkably resistant to the offending combination of subAβ and chronic stress   .
Revised:  While the area CA1 is vulnerable to stress and the combination stress/subAβ, the DG is remarkably resistant to the offending combination of subAβ and chronic stress . .
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Original: Early long-term potentiation Early long-term potentiation (E-LTP) is the first phase of long-term potentiation (LTP), a well-studied form of synaptic plasticity, and consists of an increase in synaptic strength.
Revised: Early long-term potentiation (E-LTP) is the first phase of long-term potentiation (LTP), a well-studied form of synaptic plasticity, and consists of an increase in synaptic strength.
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Original:  He was part of the group that went off to form the so-called Communist Party of Germany (Opposition ).
Revised:  He was part of the group that went off to form the so-called Communist Party of Germany - Opposition ("Kommunistische Partei Deutschlands -Opposition" / KPDO)
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Original:  He was able to maintain close contacts with former political comrades from their time together as breakwaway communists in the KPDO, notably Willi Bleicher, Ludwig Becker und Robert Siewert.
Revised:  He was able to maintain close contacts with former political comrades from their time together as breakwaway communists in the KPDO, notably Willi Bleicher, Ludwig Becker and Robert Siewert.
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Original:  He was part of the group that went off to form the so-called Communist Party of Germany - Opposition ("Kommunistische Partei Deutschlands -Opposition " / KPDO) He opposed the extremism of the Revolutionary Union Opposition ("Revolutionäre Gewerkschafts Opposition" / RGO and was among the first to call for a united front between Communists and Social Democrats as a way to block the rising tide of nationalist populism.
Revised:  He was part of the group that went off to form the so-called Communist Party of Germany - Opposition ("Kommunistische Partei Deutschlands - Opposition " / KPDO) He opposed the extremism of the Revolutionary Union Opposition ("Revolutionäre Gewerkschafts Opposition" / RGO and was among the first to call for a united front between Communists and Social Democrats as a way to block the rising tide of nationalist populism.
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Original:  He was able to maintain close contacts with former political comrades from their time together as breakwaway communists in the KPDO, notably Willi Bleicher, Ludwig Becker and Robert Siewert   .
Revised:  He was able to maintain close contacts with former political comrades from their time together as breakwaway communists in the KPDO, notably Willi Bleicher, Ludwig Becker and Robert Siewert . .
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Original:  He now devoted himself at once to rebuilding a nhew metal workers' union in the Stuttgart region.
Revised:  He now devoted himself at once to rebuilding a new metal workers' union in the Stuttgart region.
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Original: Very early onset inflammatory bowel disease (VEOIBD) is a type of IBD specific for patients younger than 6 years of age.
Revised: Very early onset inflammatory bowel disease (VEOIBD) is a type of IBD specific to patients younger than 6 years of age.
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Original:  According to age we can distiguish more specifically two cathegories within the VEOIBD diagnosis - naonatal IBD (patients younger than 1 month) and infantile IBD (patients younger than 2 years old).
Revised:  According to age we can distiguish more specifically two categories within the VEOIBD diagnosis - naonatal IBD (patients younger than 1 month) and infantile IBD (patients younger than 2 years old).
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Original:  The symptoms often include not only gastrointestinal tract, but as well other tissues, such as pituitary gland, spleen, liver, skin, respiratory tract or blood.
Revised:  The symptoms often include not only gastrointestinal tract, but also other tissues, such as pituitary gland, spleen, liver, skin, respiratory tract or blood.
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Original:  On the other hand, another primary immunodeficiency can often manifest with IBD-like symptoms, too.
Revised:  On the other hand, other types of primary immunodeficiency can often manifest with IBD-like symptoms, too.
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Original:  For example in cases like IPEX syndrome, Wiskott-Aldrich syndrome, XIAP syndrome or chronic granulomatous disease.
Revised:  These include the IPEX syndrome, Wiskott-Aldrich syndrome, XIAP syndrome or chronic granulomatous disease.
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Original: Very early onset inflammatory bowel disease (VEOIBD) is a type of IBD specific to patients younger than 6 years of age.
Revised: Very early onset inflammatory bowel disease (VEOIBD) is a type of IBD which starts in people younger than 6 years of age.
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Original: 200px José Mariano Serrano (8 September 1788–1852) was a Bolivian-born statesman and jurist.
Revised: 200px José María Serrano (8 September 1788–1852) was a Bolivian-born statesman and jurist.
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Original: 200px José María Serrano (8 September 1788–1852) was a Bolivian-born statesman and jurist.
Revised: 200px José Mariano Serrano (8 September 1788–1852) was a Bolivian-born statesman and jurist.
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Original:  Most extremely preterm babies (less than 28 weeks) require at least one red cell transfusion , this is partly due to the amount of blood removed with blood samples compared to the baby's total blood volume (iatrogenic anemia) and partly due to anemia of prematurity.
Revised:  Most extremely preterm babies (less than 28 weeks) require at least one red cell transfusion ; this is partly due to the amount of blood removed with blood samples compared to the baby's total blood volume (iatrogenic anemia) and partly due to anemia of prematurity.
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Original:  This is usually due to hemolytic disease of the newborn, but may also be due to other causes  e.g.  G6PD deficiency.
Revised:  This is usually due to hemolytic disease of the newborn, but may also be due to other causes , e.g. G6PD deficiency.
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Original:  This is usually due to hemolytic disease of the newborn, but may also be due to other causes  e.g.  G6PD deficiency.
Revised:  This is usually due to hemolytic disease of the newborn, but may also be due to other causes e.g. , G6PD deficiency.
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Original:  +Age after birthNo respiratory support Hb g/LOn oxygen Hb g/L Requiring ventilation Hb g/LUp to 24 hours< 100< 120< 1201 to 7 days< 100<100< 1208 to 14 days< 75< 95< 100More than 14 days< 75< 85< 100 There is no evidence for red cell transfusion thresholds in preterm neonates between 32 and 37 weeks gestation, and the British Society of Haematology suggested using the same thresholds as very preterm neonates that require no respiratory support.
Revised:  +Age after birthNo respiratory support Hb g/LOn oxygen Hb g/L Requiring ventilation Hb g/LUp to 24 hours< 100< 120< 1201 to 7 days< 100<100< 1208 to 14 days< 75< 95< 100More than 14 days< 75< 85< 100 There is no evidence for red cell transfusion thresholds in preterm neonates between 32 and 37 weeks gestation, and the British Society of Haematology suggests using the same thresholds as very preterm neonates that require no respiratory support.
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Original: When to transfuse ? Below are suggested transfusion thresholds for very preterm neonates (less than 32 weeks gestation) by the British Society of Haematology.
Revised: When to transfuse Below are suggested transfusion thresholds for very preterm neonates (less than 32 weeks gestation) by the British Society of Haematology.
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Original: Alberto del Rio Chaviano was a Cuban colonel who served on the side of, and during Fulgencio Batista's reign of Cuba.
Revised: Alberto del Rio Chaviano was a Cuban colonel who served on the side of, and during Fulgencio Batista's dictatorship of Cuba.
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Original:  After the Batista government stepped down, he fled to the Dominican Republic along with Antonio Policarpo Ochoa, and then emigrated to the United States.
Revised:  After the Batista government stepped down, he emigrated to the United States.
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Original: A leaf from a healthy Arabidopsis plant (left) and a leaf from a dysbiosis mutant plant (right)He, Sheng Yang (2020) When plants and their microbes are not in sync, the results can be disastrous The Conversation, 28 August 2020.
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Original: Leaves and bacteria upright=1.7| Exposure to light can trigger photosynthesis in plant leaves, such as leafy-greens, and increase concentrations of photosynthetic products, such as glucose, within the leaf tissue.
Revised:  Exposure to light can trigger photosynthesis in plant leaves, such as leafy-greens, and increase concentrations of photosynthetic products, such as glucose, within the leaf tissue.
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Original:  There were four fatalities, and the aircraft was damaged beyond repair, also its airline company ceased and was later URL 2007 High Institute of Sciences and Health opens, now part of USTP A species of rock snails Muricopsis hernandezi described 2008 -
Revised:  There were four fatalities, and the aircraft was damaged beyond repair, also its airline company ceased and was later dissolved. 2007 High Institute of Sciences and Health opens, now part of USTP A species of rock snails Muricopsis hernandezi described 2008 -
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Original: Mehdi Fetallah Benchikhoune (born April 3, 1996 in Azazga {{ ) is an Algerian footballer who plays for Algerian Ligue Professionnelle 1 club USM Alger.
Revised: Mehdi Fetallah Benchikhoune (born April 3, 1996 in Azazga {{ ) 
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Original: Infobox football biography droite Infobox Footballeur | nom = Mehdi Benchikhoune | nom de naissance = Mehdi Benchikhoune | alternative = à renseigner | nationalité = Algérien | date de naissance = | lieu de naissance = Azazga (Algérie)
Revised:  Infobox Footballeur | nom = Mehdi Benchikhoune | nom de naissance = Mehdi Benchikhoune | alternative = à renseigner | nationalité = Algérien | date de naissance = | lieu de naissance = Azazga (Algérie)
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Original:  Larisa (2020 –present ) On January 2, 2020, Garrett officially signed with Greek club Larisa for the remainder of the season.
Revised:  Larisa (2020 ) On January 2, 2020, Garrett officially signed with Greek club Larisa for the remainder of the season.
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Original: The Basketball Tournament Garrett joined House of 'Paign, a team comprised primarily of Illinois alumni in The Basketball Tournament 2020.
Revised: The Basketball Tournament Garrett joined House of 'Paign, a team composed primarily of Illinois alumni in The Basketball Tournament 2020.
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Original: Living people Category:American expatriate basketball people in France Category:American men's basketball players Category:Basketball players from Illinois Category:DePaul Blue Demons men's basketball players Category:Élan Chalon players Category:Larisa B.C. players Category:New York Knicks players Category:People with sickle-cell disease Category:Shooting guards Category:Sportspeople from Chicago Category:Undrafted National Basketball Association players Category:Westchester Knicks playe
Revised: Living people Category:American expatriate basketball people in France Category:American men's basketball players Category:Basketball players from Chicago Category:DePaul Blue Demons men's basketball players Category:Élan Chalon players Category:Larisa B.C. players Category:New York Knicks players Category:People with sickle-cell disease Category:Shooting guards Category:Sportspeople from Chicago Category:Undrafted National Basketball Association players Category:Westchester Knicks playe
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Original: Living people Category:American expatriate basketball people in France Category:American men's basketball players Category:Basketball players from Illinois Category:DePaul Blue Demons men's basketball players Category:Élan Chalon players Category:Larisa B.C. players Category:New York Knicks players Category:People with sickle-cell disease Category:Shooting guards Category:Sportspeople from Chicago Category:Undrafted National Basketball Association players Category:Westchester Knicks playe
Revised: Living people Category:American expatriate basketball people in France Category:American men's basketball players Category:Basketball players from Illinois Category:DePaul Blue Demons men's basketball players Category:Élan Chalon players Category:Larisa B.C. players Category:New York Knicks players Category:People with sickle-cell disease Category:Shooting guards Category:Undrafted National Basketball Association players Category:Westchester Knicks playe
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Original: Lakeland Magic (2021 –present ) For the 2020–21 season, Garrett joined the Lakeland Magic of the G League .
Revised: Lakeland Magic (2021 ) For the 2020–21 season, Garrett joined the Lakeland Magic of the G League .
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Original: Election results + Parliament of Malaysia : P174 Penampang, Sabah Percentage figures based on total turnout (including votes for candidates not listed).
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Original:  He was a MLA of Indian National Congress from Dholka from 2007 to 2012 References URL URL URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links UR
Revised:  He was a MLA of Indian National Congress from Dholka from 2007 to 2012. References URL URL URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links UR
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Original:  He was a MLA of Indian National Congress from Dholka from 2007 to 2012 References URL URL URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links UR
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Original:  He was a MLA of Indian National Congress from Dholka from 2007 to 2012 References URL URL URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links UR
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Original:  He was a MLA of Indian National Congress from Dholka from 2007 to 2012 References URL URL URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links UR
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Original:  He was a MLA of Indian National Congress from Dholka from 2007 to 2012 References URL URL URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links UR
Revised:  He was a MLA of Indian National Congress from Dholka from 2007 to 2012 References URL URL URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Reference
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Original: Uhuru Muigai Kenyatta (born 26 October 1961) is a Kenyan politician who has served as the fourth and President of Kenya since 2013.
Revised: Uhuru Muigai Kenyatta (born 26 October 1961) is a Kenyan politician who has served as the fourth President of Kenya since 2013.
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Original: Uhuru Muigai Kenyatta (born 26 October 1961) is a Kenyan politician who has served as the fourth President of Kenya since 2013.
Revised: Uhuru Muigai Kenyatta is a Kenyan politician who has served as the fourth President of Kenya since 2013.
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Original:  Uhuru Kenyatta was born October 26th 1961 to the future first president of Kenya, Jomo Kenyatta, and his fourth wife, Mama Ngina Kenyatta (née Muhoho).
Revised:  Uhuru Kenyatta was born 26 October 1961 to the future first president of Kenya, Jomo Kenyatta, and his fourth wife, Mama Ngina Kenyatta (née Muhoho).
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Original:  The overrepresentation of engineers could depend on a sampling bias . Natural science students have more relatives with autism than humanities students .
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Original:  A follow-up study by David A. Routh and Christopher Jarrold found  doctors, scientists, and accountants to also be overrepresented among the fathers of authist , while "skilled and unskilled manual workers are less common as fathers than would be predicted".
Revised:  A follow-up study by David A. Routh and Christopher Jarrold found disproportionate numbers of doctors, scientists, and accountants to also be overrepresented among the fathers of authist , while "skilled and unskilled manual workers are less common as fathers than would be predicted".
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Original:  A follow-up study by David A. Routh and Christopher Jarrold found  doctors, scientists, and accountants to also be overrepresented among the fathers of authist , while "skilled and unskilled manual workers are less common as fathers than would be predicted".
Revised:  A follow-up study by David A. Routh and Christopher Jarrold found doctors, scientists, and accountants were fathers of autists , while "skilled and unskilled manual workers are less common as fathers than would be predicted".
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Original: Criticism The empathising-systematising theory has faced some criticism .
Revised: Criticism The empathising-systematising theory has been criticized on multiple grounds .
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Original:  Another neuroscientist, Gina Rippon, opposes his theories on her book The Gendered Brain: The new neuroscience that shatters the myth of the female brain.
Revised:  Another neuroscientist, Gina Rippon, criticizes his theories in her book The Gendered Brain: The new neuroscience that shatters the myth of the female brain.
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Original:  Psychology Today  , 1 January 2004
Revised:  Psychology Today '' , 1 January 2004
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