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Original:  The arrest come after the failed  $ US19.5 billion bid by state owned Chinalco to obtain an 18\% stake in Rio Tinto and during the annual iron ore supply and price negotiations.
Revised:  The arrest come after the failed US $ US19.5 billion bid by state owned Chinalco to obtain an 18\% stake in Rio Tinto and during the annual iron ore supply and price negotiations.
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Original:  The arrest come after the failed  $ US19.5 billion bid by state owned Chinalco to obtain an 18\% stake in Rio Tinto and during the annual iron ore supply and price negotiations.
Revised:  The arrest come after the failed $ 19.5 billion bid by state owned Chinalco to obtain an 18\% stake in Rio Tinto and during the annual iron ore supply and price negotiations.
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Original:  Chinese foreign ministry official Qin Gang cautioned Australia against politicising the issue, the maximum penalty for espionage in China is life imprisonment.
Revised:  Chinese foreign ministry spokesperson Qin Gang cautioned Australia against politicising the issue, the maximum penalty for espionage in China is life imprisonment.
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Original:  While Australian Trade Minister Simon Crean prepares to leave for meetings in Beijing over the issue  the Australian Labor Government has called for the opposition parties to discipline Nationals Senator leader Barnaby Joyce over comments linking the failed bid to the arrests as being grossly irresponsible.
Revised:  While Australian Trade Minister Simon Crean prepares to leave for meetings in Beijing over the issue , the Australian Labor Government has called for the opposition parties to discipline Nationals Senator leader Barnaby Joyce over comments linking the failed bid to the arrests as being grossly irresponsible.
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Original:  Opposition leader Malcolm Turnbull called on Australian Prime Minister Kevin Rudd to contact the Chinese government and demand that Australian citizen Mr Hu be released and granted access to consular officials.
Revised:  Opposition leader Malcolm Turnbull called on Australian Prime Minister Kevin Rudd to contact the Chinese government and demand that Hu, an Australian citizen, be released and granted access to consular officials.
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Original:  On Thursday Xinhua News agency confirmed the arrests, the first official announcement since the group were detained on Sunday.
Revised:  On Thursday Xinhua News agency confirmed the arrests, the first official announcement since the group was detained on Sunday.
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Original:  Xinhua also reported that a number of Chinese nationals have been detained and authorities are considering further investigations into China's steel production in the Shandong and Hebei province
Revised:  The Xinhua News Agency also reported that a number of Chinese nationals have been detained and authorities are considering further investigations into China's steel production in the Shandong and Hebei province
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Original: The Saskatchewan provincial government alongside the University of Saskatchewan have come together to begin construction of a CA$500 million, 10 megawatts research nuclear reactor to produce medical isotopes.
Revised: The Saskatchewan provincial government alongside the University of Saskatchewan have come together to establish a CA$500 million, 10 megawatts research nuclear reactor to produce medical isotopes.
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Original: The Saskatchewan provincial government alongside the University of Saskatchewan  have come together to establish a CA$500 million, 10 megawatts research nuclear reactor to produce medical isotopes.
Revised: The Saskatchewan provincial government alongside the University of Saskatchewan (U of S) have come together to establish a CA$500 million, 10 megawatts research nuclear reactor to produce medical isotopes.
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Original: The Petten reactor in Holland is another of the six extant nuclear reactors globally.
Revised: The Petten reactor in the Netherlands is another of the six extant nuclear reactors globally.
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Original: Sixty firefighters were called to Dean Street, where a four-storey office building was alight .
Revised: Sixty firefighters were called to Dean Street, where the four-storey office building was alight .
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Original:  Spitler discovered that AT&T had inadvertently made data publicly available through their website, and wrote a script allowing him to access the email addresses of approximately 120,000 customers, including that of then-New York mayor Michael Bloomberg.
Revised:  Spitler discovered that AT&T had inadvertently made data publicly available through their website, and wrote a script allowing him to obtain the email addresses of approximately 120,000 customers, including that of then-New York mayor Michael Bloomberg.
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Original: |left Yesterday, the overturned the conviction of Andrew “weev” Auernheimer , who had been sentenced to three and a half years in federal prison after exploiting a bug in 's website, allowing him access to confidential data about their customers.
Revised: |left Yesterday, the overturned the conviction of , who had been sentenced to three and a half years in federal prison after exploiting a bug in 's website, allowing him access to confidential data about their customers.
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Original:  The court stressed that the ruling was not a mere technicality, going on to state that it was a basic constitutional right  .
Revised:  The court said the issue represented a basic constitutional right .
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Original:  The court stressed that the ruling was not a mere technicality, going on to state that it was a basic constitutional right  .
Revised:  The court stressed that the ruling was not a mere technicality, going on to state that it was a basic constitutional right and not a mere technicality .
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Original:  Auernheimer passed this information to , who published the information in a redacted form .
Revised:  Auernheimer passed this information to , who published a redacted version .
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Original: The notorious hacker and self-described "troll", along with co-defendant Daniel Spitler (who pled guilty), was convicted by federal jury in November 2012 by a court under the , with counts of conspiracy  and identify theft.
Revised: The hacker and self-described "troll", along with co-defendant Daniel Spitler (who pled guilty), was convicted by federal jury in November 2012 by a court under the , with counts of conspiracy and identify theft.
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Original: The notorious hacker and self-described "troll", along with co-defendant Daniel Spitler (who pled guilty), was convicted by federal jury in November 2012 by a court under the , with counts of conspiracy  and identify theft.
Revised: The notorious hacker and self-described "troll", along with co-defendant Daniel Spitler (who pled guilty), was convicted by federal jury in November 2012 by a court under the , of conspiracy to unlawfully access AT and identify theft.
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Original:  Spitler discovered that AT&T had inadvertently made data publicly available through their website, and wrote a script allowing him to obtain the email addresses of approximately 120,000 customers, including that of then-New York mayor Michael Bloomberg .
Revised:  Spitler discovered that AT&T had inadvertently made data publicly available through their website, and wrote a script allowing him to obtain the email addresses of approximately 120,000 customers, including that of then-New York mayor .
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Original: The hacker and self-described "troll" , along with co-defendant Daniel Spitler (who pled guilty), was convicted by federal jury in November 2012 by a court under the , of conspiracy to unlawfully access AT&T's servers and identify theft . Spitler discovered that AT&T had inadvertently made data publicly available through their website, and wrote a script allowing him to obtain the email addresses of approximately 120,000 customers, including that of then-New York mayor .
Revised: The hacker and self-described "troll" was convicted of conspiracy to unlawfully access AT&T's servers and identify theft . Spitler discovered that AT&T had inadvertently made data publicly available through their website, and wrote a script allowing him to obtain the email addresses of approximately 120,000 customers, including that of then-New York mayor .
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Original: The hacker and self-described "troll" , along with co-defendant Daniel Spitler (who pled guilty), was convicted by federal jury in November 2012 by a court under the , of conspiracy to unlawfully access AT&T's servers and identify theft . Spitler discovered that AT&T had inadvertently made data publicly available through their website, and wrote a script allowing him to obtain the email addresses of approximately 120,000 customers, including that of then-New York mayor .
Revised: The hacker and self-described "troll" , along with co-defendant Daniel Spitler (who pled guilty), was convicted by federal jury in November 2012 by a court under the , of conspiracy to unlawfully access AT&T's servers and identify theft by federal jury in November 2012 by a court under the . Co-defendant Daniel Spitler plead guilty. Spitler discovered that AT&T had inadvertently made data publicly available through their website, and wrote a script allowing him to obtain the email addresses of approximately 120,000 customers, including that of then-New York mayor .
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Original: A plane crashed in Richmond, B.C. on Thursday night, carrying blood donations.
Revised: A plane crashed in on Thursday night, carrying blood donations.
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Original:  The plane, a twin engine PA-31 Piper Navajo departed from Victoria , when it nosedived into a parking lot during it's final approach to Vancouver shortly after 10 PM.
Revised:  The plane, a twin engine PA-31 Piper Navajo departed from Victoria , when it nosedived into a parking lot during it's final approach to shortly after 10 PM.
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Original:  Witnesses reported the plane flying unusually low prior to it crashing and bursting into flames by Bridgeport road, behind a large Ikea store.
Revised:  Witnesses report the plane flying unusually low prior to it crashing and bursting into flames by Bridgeport road, behind a large Ikea store.
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Original:  Witnesses reported the plane flying unusually low prior to it crashing and bursting into flames by Bridgeport road, behind a large Ikea store.
Revised:  Witnesses reported the plane flying unusually low prior to it crashing and bursting into flames by Bridgeport road, behind a large store.
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Original:  The plane, a twin engine PA-31 Piper Navojo departed from w:Victoria, BC| Victoria , when it nosedived into a parking lot during it's final approach to Vancouver International Airport shortly after 10 PM.
Revised:  The plane, a twin engine PA-31 Piper Navojo departed from Victoria , when it nosedived into a parking lot during it's final approach to Vancouver International Airport shortly after 10 PM.
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Original: A plane  crashed in Richmond, B.C. on Thursday night , carrying blood donations .
Revised: A plane , carrying blood donations, crashed in Richmond, B.C. on Thursday night , carrying blood donations .
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Original: A plane  crashed in Richmond, B.C. on Thursday night , carrying blood donations .
Revised: A plane crashed in Richmond, B.C. on Thursday night .
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Original:  Despite the tragedy, RCMP Assistant Commissioner Peter German publicly stated that it was very lucky that nobody on the ground was killed.
Revised:  Despite the tragedy, Royal Canadian Mounted Police Assistant Commissioner Peter German publicly stated that it was very lucky that nobody on the ground was killed.
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Original: All two of the pilots onboard the plane were killed, it is unknown if there were any other passengers.
Revised: Both of the pilots onboard the plane were killed, it is unknown if there were any other passengers.
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Original: All two of the pilots onboard the plane were killed, it is unknown if there were any other passengers.
Revised: All two of the pilots on-board were killed, it is unknown if there were any other passengers.
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Original: All two of the pilots onboard the plane were killed, it is unknown if there were any other passengers.
Revised: All two of the pilots onboard the plane were killed, it not yet known if there were any other passengers.
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Original:  Despite the tragedy, Royal Canadian Mounted Police Assistant Commissioner Peter German publicly stated that it was very lucky that nobody on the ground was killed.
Revised:  Royal Canadian Mounted Police Assistant Commissioner Peter German publicly stated that it was very lucky that nobody on the ground was killed.
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Original:  Despite the tragedy, Royal Canadian Mounted Police Assistant Commissioner Peter German publicly stated that it was very lucky that nobody on the ground was killed.
Revised:  Despite the tragedy, Royal Canadian Mounted Police Assistant Commissioner Peter German stated that it was very lucky that nobody on the ground was killed.
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Original:  The plane, a twin engine PA-31 Piper Navojo departed from Victoria, when it nosedived into a parking lot during it's final approach to Vancouver International Airport shortly after 10 PM  . Witnesses report the plane flying unusually low prior to it crashing and bursting into flames by Bridgeport road , behind a large Ikea store.
Revised:  The plane, a twin engine PA-31 Piper Navojo departed from Victoria, when it nosedived into a parking lot during it's final approach to Vancouver International Airport shortly after 10 PM . Witnesses report the plane flying unusually low prior to it crashing and bursting into flames by Bridgeport Road , behind a large Ikea store.
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Original: "The plane engine sounded real low, it came almost straight down," according to the Vancouver Sun who asked witness Darren Van Leeuwen.
Revised: "The plane engine sounded real low, it came almost straight down," according to The Vancouver Sun who asked witness Darren Van Leeuwen.
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Original:  The storm, now officially Tropical Storm Carols , is the third named storm of the 2009 hurricane season.
Revised:  The storm, now officially Tropical Storm Carlos , is the third named storm of the 2009 hurricane season.
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Original:  Carols is located about 910 miles south-southwest of Baja California, Mexico, and is currently tracking west at 14 miles per hour.
Revised:  Carlos is located about 910 miles south-southwest of Baja California, Mexico, and is currently tracking west at 14 miles per hour.
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Original:  The United States National Hurricane Center  has upgraded Tropical Depression Four-E to tropical storm status.
Revised:  The United States National Hurricane Center (NHC) has upgraded Tropical Depression Four-E to tropical storm status.
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Original:  A fairly small and well-organized storm, Carlos is expected to strengthen into a hurricane as it continues westward, away from land
Revised:  A fairly small and well-organized storm, NHC forecasters expect Carlos to strengthen into a hurricane as it continues westward, away from land
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Original:  The United States National Hurricane Center (NHC) has upgraded Tropical Depression Four-E to tropical storm status.
Revised:  The United States (NHC) has upgraded Tropical Depression Four-E to tropical storm status.
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Original:  As Saul Relative says, "You'll find yourself yatching this feel good video commercial again and again."
Revised:  As Saul Relative says, "You'll find yourself watching this feel good video commercial again and again."
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Original:  The advertisement has hit the television air waves in the countries of France, Belgium, and Canada.
Revised:  The advertisement has been aired on television in the countries of France, Belgium, and Canada.
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Original:  Registering 3,670,597 views in the past week alone on YouTube, the roller skating babies international version advertisement has become a YouTube sensation.
Revised:  Registering 3,670,597 views in the past week alone , an international advertisement featuring roller-skating babies has become a YouTube sensation.
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Original:  There is also a French and US version which also have seen 500,000 visitor hits and 1.5 million respectively , entertaining people who watch nearly 100 roller-skating babies undertaking stunts and leaps.
Revised:  French and US version which also have seen 500,000 visitor hits and 1.5 million respectively , entertaining people who watch nearly 100 roller-skating babies undertaking stunts and leaps.
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Original:  As Saul Relative says, "You'll find yourself watching this feel good video commercial again and again."
Revised:  Reviewer Saul Relative says, "You'll find yourself watching this feel good video commercial again and again."
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Original:  The babies roller skate to a remix of The Sugarhill Gang's top 40 hip hop single Rapper's Delight.
Revised:  The babies roller-skate to a remix of The Sugarhill Gang's top 40 hip hop single Rapper's Delight.
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Original:  The advertisement has been aired on television in the countries of France, Belgium, and Canada.
Revised:  The advertisement has been aired on television in France, Belgium, and Canada.
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Original:  "It's working so well virally that plans for TV in the UK are still under review . " said an Evian representative
Revised:  "It's working so well virally that plans for TV in the UK are still under review , " said an Evian representative
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Original:  French and US versions of the advert for Evian mineral water have also seen 500,000 visitor hits and 1.5 million  respectively.
Revised:  French and US versions of the advert for Evian mineral water have also seen 500,000 and 1.5 million respectively.
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Original:  A demonstration of waterboarding Merriam–Webster announced that it has added over a hundred new words to the pages of its Collegiate Dictionary.
Revised: File:Waterboarding.jpg| A demonstration of waterboarding Merriam–Webster announced that it has added over a hundred new words to the pages of its Collegiate Dictionary.
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Original:  Most notable among these additons include: webisode, a television episode viewed from the web, staycation, a vacation that occurs near one's home, and vlog, a form of blog that features videos.
Revised:  Most notable among these additions include: webisode, a television episode viewed from the web, staycation, a vacation that occurs near one's home, and vlog, a form of blog that features videos.
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Original:  Two recurring themes among the new words included, "Government activites ," and words of Arabic origin.
Revised:  Two recurring themes among the new words included, "Government activities ," and words of Arabic origin.
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Original:  Webster's definition does not include the word "torture" as part of its defintion .
Revised:  Webster's definition does not include the word "torture" as part of its definition .
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Original:  Most notable among these additions include: webisode, a television episode viewed from the web, staycation, a vacation that occurs near one's home, and vlog, a form of blog that features videos.
Revised:  Notable among these additions include: webisode, a television episode viewed from the web, staycation, a vacation that occurs near one's home, and vlog, a form of blog that features videos.
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Original:  Webster's definition does not include the word "torture" as part of its definition.
Revised:  Webster's does not include the word "torture" as part of its definition.
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Original: Two recurring themes among the new words included, " Government activities," and words of Arabic origin.
Revised: Two recurring themes among the new words included, " government activities," and words of Arabic origin.
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Original:  Drawing a line between the stage persona and the man who played it, the band add "Just face it – Oderus would order you to be present and pay tribute to Dave Murray Brockie, his own personal slave!"
Revised:  Drawing a line between the stage persona and the man who played it, the band add "Just face it — Oderus would order you to be present and pay tribute to Dave Murray Brockie, his own personal slave!"
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Original:  They say the foundation's first task will be to fund and erect a monument "to provide the world with a place to pay respects to the memory of a very cherished man . " 
Revised:  They say the foundation's first task will be to fund and erect a monument "to provide the world with a place to pay respects to the memory of a very cherished man " 
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Original:  They say the foundation's first task will be to fund and erect a monument "to provide the world with a place to pay respects to the memory of a very cherished man . " 
Revised:  They say the foundation's first task will be to fund and erect a monument "to provide the world with a place to pay respects to the memory of a very cherished man . " .
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Original:  The launch of Endeavour has been delayed at least 24 hours after the shuttle's launchpad was struck by lightning at least 11 times this afternoon.
Revised: Lightning strikes Endeavour's launchpad. The launch of Endeavour has been delayed at least 24 hours after the shuttle's launchpad was struck by lightning at least 11 times this afternoon.
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Original:  Astronauts will attach a platform to the outside of the Japanese module that will allow experiments to be exposed to space  
Revised:  Astronauts will attach a platform to the outside of the Japanese module that will allow experiments to be exposed to space . 
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Original: "   We've seen nothing so far that shows anything affected any of the systems.
Revised: " " We've seen nothing so far that shows anything affected any of the systems.
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Original: "Sensors indicted there were 11 lightning strikes within 0.35 miles, which is inside the launch pad's threshold," said a statement on NASA's website.
Revised: "Sensors indicated there were 11 lightning strikes within 0.35 miles, which is inside the launch pad's threshold," said a statement on NASA's website.
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Original: June 26, 2005 British television host Richard Whiteley, most famous for his role in television series Countdown, has died aged 61 at Leeds General Infirmary.
Revised:  British television host Richard Whiteley, most famous for his role in television series Countdown, has died aged 61 at Leeds General Infirmary.
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Original:  Whiteley leaves behind a partner of 11 years, actress Kathryn Apanowic
Revised:  Whiteley leaves behind a partner of 11 years, actress Kathryn Apanowicz
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Original: British television host Richard Whiteley, most famous for his role in television series Countdown, has died aged 61 at Leeds General Infirmary.
Revised: British television host Richard Whiteley, most famous for his role in television game show Countdown, has died aged 61 at Leeds General Infirmary.
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Original: British television host Richard Whiteley, most famous for his role in television game show Countdown, has died aged 61 at Leeds General Infirmary.
Revised: British television host Richard Whiteley, most famous for his role presenting the British television game show Countdown, has died aged 61 at Leeds General Infirmary.
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