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Original: Huaihai Campaign and death On November 8, 1948, the Huaihai Campaign was about to start, so the nationalist department of defense decided to withdrew the 7th army and the 6th army from northern Jiansu (江苏) province to the nationalist military headquarters in Xuzhou.
Revised: Huaihai Campaign and death On November 8, 1948, the Huaihai Campaign was about to start, so the nationalist department of defense decided to withdrew the 7th army and the 6th army from northern Jiangsu province to the nationalist military headquarters in Xuzhou.
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Original:  Huang was ordered to wait for another KMT corps (44th corps) to arrive from the 9th pacification zone in Haizhou (海州) before he can travel across the grand canal , precious time of 2 days were wasted.
Revised:  Huang was ordered to wait for another KMT corps (44th corps) to arrive from the 9th pacification zone in Haizhou (海州) before he can travel across the Grand Canal , precious time of 2 days were wasted.
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Original:  But Lieutenant General Qiu Qingquan (邱清泉) , commander of the 2nd army, was not eager to save his beleaguered colleague because of their previous feuds and feared the Communists might encircle his unit as well.
Revised:  But Lieutenant General Qiu Qingquan , commander of the 2nd army, was not eager to save his beleaguered colleague because of their previous feuds and feared the Communists might encircle his unit as well.
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Original: Huang Baitao ( Chinese: 黄百韬 ;
Revised: Huang Baitao ( ;
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Original:  Li Mi did try but his relieve efforts were beaten back by the communist forces  despite the support of the planes and tanks thus equally unsuccessful in saving the 7th Army . After 15 days of brutal fighting, the 7th army was destroyed in Nianzhuang (碾庄) village, only 20 miles from Xuzhou.
Revised:  Li Mi did try but his relief efforts were beaten back by the communist forces despite the support of the planes and tanks thus equally unsuccessful in saving the 7th Army . After 15 days of brutal fighting, the 7th army was destroyed in Nianzhuang (碾庄) village, only 20 miles from Xuzhou.
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Original:  Li Mi did try but his relieve efforts were beaten back by the communist forces  despite the support of the planes and tanks thus equally unsuccessful in saving the 7th Army . After 15 days of brutal fighting, the 7th army was destroyed in Nianzhuang (碾庄) village, only 20 miles from Xuzhou.
Revised:  Li Mi did try but his relieve efforts were beaten back by the communist forces , despite the support of the planes and tanks thus equally unsuccessful in saving the 7th Army . After 15 days of brutal fighting, the 7th army was destroyed in Nianzhuang (碾庄) village, only 20 miles from Xuzhou.
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Original:  Li Mi did try but his relieve efforts were beaten back by the communist forces  despite the support of the planes and tanks thus equally unsuccessful in saving the 7th Army . After 15 days of brutal fighting, the 7th army was destroyed in Nianzhuang (碾庄) village, only 20 miles from Xuzhou.
Revised:  Li Mi did try but his relieve efforts were beaten back by the communist forces despite the support of planes and tanks thus equally unsuccessful in saving the 7th Army . After 15 days of brutal fighting, the 7th army was destroyed in Nianzhuang (碾庄) village, only 20 miles from Xuzhou.
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Original:  Li Mi did try but his relieve efforts were beaten back by the communist forces  despite the support of the planes and tanks thus equally unsuccessful in saving the 7th Army . After 15 days of brutal fighting, the 7th army was destroyed in Nianzhuang (碾庄) village, only 20 miles from Xuzhou.
Revised:  Li Mi did try but his relieve efforts were beaten back by the communist forces despite the support of the planes and tanks . After 15 days of brutal fighting, the 7th army was destroyed in Nianzhuang (碾庄) village, only 20 miles from Xuzhou.
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Original:  The Nationalist Government posthumously promoted him to four-star general and awarded him with  second Order of Blue Sky and White Sun.
Revised:  The Nationalist Government posthumously promoted him to four-star general and awarded him with his second Order of Blue Sky and White Sun.
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Original: Cheriyan Kandi Muhammad Koya was born in 1927 at Atholi , in northern Kerala, to Payampunathil Ali and Mariyumma.
Revised: Cheriyan Kandi Muhammad Koya was born in 1927 at Atholi in northern Kerala, to Payampunathil Ali and Mariyumma.
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Original: While studying at Zamorin's College, Calicut, Koya founded the Muslim Students Federation - MSF , the youth wing of the All-India Muslim League.
Revised: While studying at Zamorin's College, Calicut, Koya founded the Muslim Students Federation , the youth wing of the All-India Muslim League.
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Original: Method of Operation and Performance Characteristics Figure 1 describes the general method of operation of a short baseline system system.
Revised: Method Figure 1 describes the general method of operation of a short baseline system system.
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Original:  History and Examples of Use SBL systems are found employed in a variety of often specialized applications.
Revised:  History SBL systems are found employed in a variety of often specialized applications.
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Original:  Example of SBL System Use: Under-The-Ice Surveying by ROV in Antarctica 300px|Figure 2: The SCINI ROV next to its dive hole at Heald Island, Antarctica 300px|Figure 3: SBL positioning system deployment at Cape Evans.
Revised:  Example 300px|Figure 2: The SCINI ROV next to its dive hole at Heald Island, Antarctica 300px|Figure 3: SBL positioning system deployment at Cape Evans.
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Original: A Short Baseline  (SBL) Acoustic Positioning SystemUnderwater Acoustic Positioning Systems, Chapter 3, P.H. Milne  1983, ISBN 0-87201-012-0 is one of three broad classes of underwater acoustic positioning systems that are used to track underwater vehicles and divers.
Revised: A Short Baseline (SBL) acoustic positioning systemUnderwater Acoustic Positioning Systems, Chapter 3, P.H. Milne 1983, ISBN 0-87201-012-0 is one of three broad classes of underwater acoustic positioning systems that are used to track underwater vehicles and divers.
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Original: A Short Baseline  (SBL) Acoustic Positioning SystemUnderwater Acoustic Positioning Systems, Chapter 3, P.H. Milne  1983, ISBN 0-87201-012-0 is one of three broad classes of underwater acoustic positioning systems that are used to track underwater vehicles and divers.
Revised: A Short Baseline (SBL) Acoustic Positioning SystemUnderwater Acoustic Positioning Systems, Chapter 3, P.H. Milne , 1983, ISBN 0-87201-012-0 is one of three broad classes of underwater acoustic positioning systems that are used to track underwater vehicles and divers.
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Original:  The other two classes are Ultra Short Baseline Systems (USBL) and Long Baseline Systems (LBL).
Revised:  The other two classes are ultra short baseline systems (USBL) and Long Baseline Systems (LBL).
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Original:  The other two classes are Ultra Short Baseline Systems (USBL) and Long Baseline Systems (LBL).
Revised:  The other two classes are Ultra Short Baseline Systems (USBL) and long baseline systems (LBL).
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Original:  Method and performance 300px|Figure 1: Method of the operation of a Short Baseline (SBL) acoustic positioning system for ROV Short baseline systems determine the position of a tracked target such as a ROV by measuring the target's distance from three or more transducers that are, for example, lowered over the side of the surface vessel from which tracking operations take place.
Revised:  Operation and performance Short baseline systems determine the position of a tracked target such as a ROV by measuring the target's distance from three or more transducers that are, for example, lowered over the side of the surface vessel from which tracking operations take place.
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Original:  The transponder replies, and the reply is received by the three baseline trasducers (A, C, D). Signal run time measurements now yield the distances B-A, B-C and B-D.
Revised:  The transponder replies, and the reply is received by the three baseline transducers (A, C, D). Signal run time measurements now yield the distances B-A, B-C and B-D.
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Original:  The reported accuracy is 0.09mIntegrating Precision Relative Positioning Into JASON/MEDEA ROV Operations, Bingham et . al., MTS Journal Spring 2006 (Volume 40, Number 1)
Revised:  The reported accuracy is 0.09mIntegrating Precision Relative Positioning Into JASON/MEDEA ROV Operations, Bingham et al., MTS Journal Spring 2006 (Volume 40, Number 1)
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Original:  , this includes 22 of the 27 member states of the European Union  .
Revised:  , this comprises 22 of the 27 member states of the European Union .
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Original:  After Sweden: bans around the world After the Swedish success, the following countries and territories have (or are planned to have) completely prohibited corporal punishment of children:
Revised:  After Sweden: bans around the world the following countries and territories have (or are planned to have) completely prohibited corporal punishment of children:
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Original: the self-reported STI-like symptoms and unsafe sexual behavior taken together as a predictor of confirmed STIs improve the sensitivity to a significantly greater degree (χ 2 = 2.83, p < 0.05) as compared to the sensitivity of self-reported STI-like symptoms or unsafe sexual behavior alone as a predictor of confirmed STIs.
Revised: The self-reported STI-like symptoms and unsafe sexual behavior taken together as a predictor of confirmed STIs improve the sensitivity to a significantly greater degree (χ 2 = 2.83, p < 0.05) as compared to the sensitivity of self-reported STI-like symptoms or unsafe sexual behavior alone as a predictor of confirmed STIs.
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Original: Self-report sexual risk behaviors are a cornerstone of reproductive health-related research, particularly when related to assessing risk-related outcomes such as pregnancy or acquisition of sexually transmitted diseases (STDs) such as HIV.
Revised: Self-report sexual risk behaviors are a cornerstone of reproductive health–related research, particularly when related to assessing risk-related outcomes such as pregnancy or acquisition of sexually transmitted diseases (STDs) such as HIV.
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Original:   Methodological challenges in research on sexual risk behavior: II.
Revised:  " Methodological challenges in research on sexual risk behavior: II.
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Original:  Accuracy of self-reports  .
Revised:  Accuracy of self-reports " .
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Original:  Annals of Behavioral Medicine .26 :2. 104-123.
Revised:  Annals of Behavioral Medicine . 26 :2. 104-123.
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Original:  Annals of Behavioral Medicine .26 :2. 104-123.
Revised:  Annals of Behavioral Medicine .26 :2. 104–123.
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Original:  With trade and communication made dangerous by the British blockade squadrons, the economies and morale of the French colonies began to collapse, and in the summer of 1808 desperate messages were sent to France requesting aid .
Revised:  With trade and communication made dangerous by the British blockade squadrons, the economies and morale of the French colonies began to collapse, and in the summer of 1808 desperate messages were sent to France requesting helping .
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Original:  Traces of polygamy have been apparent throughout Niue history, though the practice is said to have completely disappeared on the island , making polygamy non-existent at the present day .
Revised:  Traces of polygamy have been apparent throughout Niue history, though the practice is said to have completely disappeared on the island .
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Original: Art-Lex, "Flat"Tom Wolfe, The Painted Word (Bantam, 1975: ISBN 0-553-38065-6) its also the girls in our class nuff said...
Revised: Art-Lex, "Flat"Tom Wolfe, The Painted Word (Bantam, 1975: ISBN 0-553-38065-6) 
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Original:  Critic Clement Greenberg believed that flatness, or two-dimensionality , was an essential and desirable quality in painting, a criterion which implies rejection of painterliness and impasto.
Revised:  Critic Clement Greenberg believed that flatness, or two-dimensional , was an essential and desirable quality in painting, a criterion which implies rejection of painterliness and impasto.
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Original: Art-Lex, "Flat"Tom Wolfe, The Painted Word (Bantam, 1975: ISBN 0-553-38065-6)  &  &     
Revised: Art-Lex, "Flat"Tom Wolfe, The Painted Word (Bantam, 1975: ISBN 0-553-38065-6) & & This concept inspired a whole new art form called Pop Art. It retained the color scheme and simplicity of Minimalism, but it borrowed images from pop culture to become relatable. The works now in question held a meaning for the viewer with familiar imagery but it still retained the avant-garde approach of Minimalism. Pop Art is a well-recognized movement for 1960s culture. This type of art was very free form fashionable and rebellious. It was wild and colorful but many works retained the idea of two dimensional flatness.Irving Sandler. American Art Of The 1960s. Harper and Row, 1988. 
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Original: Art-Lex, "Flat"Tom Wolfe, The Painted Word (Bantam, 1975: ISBN 0-553-38065-6)  &  &     
Revised: Art-Lex, "Flat"Tom Wolfe, The Painted Word (Bantam, 1975: ISBN 0-553-38065-6) & & Pop Art fell out of fashion and a new movement came into being. Op Art or Optic Art was now the latest trend in home décor and fashion. This form of modern art shares a strong relationship with the culture thought and design of the 1960s. This new art form focused on non-objective painting that focused on design, color, form, and line. These paintings where hand drawn or created with a mechanical aid. They featured a flat looking two dimensional design that could appear to pop out in an almost three dimensional form. Some pieces look as if they are moving due to shape and line placement creating a trick of the eye. This form of art was created to test the limits of the conscious perception of the viewer. Houston, Joe. Optic Nerve Perceptual Art Of The 1960s. London, New York: Merrell Publishers Limited, 2007. 
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Original: Well-being, also known as wellness, wellbeing, prudential value or quality of life, refers to what is intrinsically valuable relative to someone.
Revised: Well-being, also known as wellness, prudential value or quality of life, refers to what is intrinsically valuable relative to someone.
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Original:   "    'Well-being'  'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' '  Objective accounts of well-being' '  Hedonistic accounts of well-being' '  Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
Revised:  '' " 'Well-being' 'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' ' Objective accounts of well-being' ' Hedonistic accounts of well-being' ' Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
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Original:   "    'Well-being'  'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' '  Objective accounts of well-being' '  Hedonistic accounts of well-being' '  Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
Revised:  " 'Well-being' , 'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' ' Objective accounts of well-being' ' Hedonistic accounts of well-being' ' Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
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Original:   "    'Well-being'  'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' '  Objective accounts of well-being' '  Hedonistic accounts of well-being' '  Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
Revised:  " 'Well-being' 'Desire-satisfaction accounts ' Objective accounts of well-being' ' Hedonistic accounts of well-being' ' Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
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Original:   "    'Well-being'  'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' '  Objective accounts of well-being' '  Hedonistic accounts of well-being' '  Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
Revised:  " 'Well-being' 'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' ' , ' Objective accounts of well-being' ' Hedonistic accounts of well-being' ' Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
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Original:   "    'Well-being'  'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' '  Objective accounts of well-being' '  Hedonistic accounts of well-being' '  Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
Revised:  " 'Well-being' 'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' ' Objective accounts ' Hedonistic accounts of well-being' ' Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
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Original:   "    'Well-being'  'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' '  Objective accounts of well-being' '  Hedonistic accounts of well-being' '  Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
Revised:  " 'Well-being' 'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' ' Objective accounts of well-being' ' , ' Hedonistic accounts of well-being' ' Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
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Original:   "    'Well-being'  'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' '  Objective accounts of well-being' '  Hedonistic accounts of well-being' '  Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
Revised:  " 'Well-being' 'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' ' Objective accounts of well-being' ' Hedonistic accounts ' Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
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Original:   "    'Well-being'  'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' '  Objective accounts of well-being' '  Hedonistic accounts of well-being' '  Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
Revised:  " 'Well-being' 'Desire-satisfaction accounts of well-being' ' Objective accounts of well-being' ' Hedonistic accounts of well-being' ' , ' Perfectionist accounts of well-being' 'Hybrid accounts of well-being' Hooray for GDP! GDP as a measure of wellbeing (2012-12-22), Nicholas Oulton, Center for Economic and Policy Research (CEPR) Happiness and satisfaction are not everything:
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Original:  '' " The ONS then introduced four questions pertaining to wellbeing in their 2011 national survey of the UK population, relating to evaluative well-being, eudemonic well-being, and positive and negative affect.
Revised:  " The ONS then introduced four questions pertaining to wellbeing in their 2011 national survey of the UK population, relating to evaluative well-being, eudemonic well-being, and positive and negative affect.
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Original:  In this sense, welfarists may agree that the cited examples are valuable at all but disagree that they are intrinsically valuable''.
Revised:  In this sense, welfarists may agree that the cited examples are valuable in some form but disagree that they are intrinsically valuable''.
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Original: Philosopher Michael Bishop developed a causal network account of well-being in The Good Life: Unifying The Philosophy And Psychology Of Well-being.
Revised: Philosopher Michael Bishop developed a causal network account of well-being in The Good Life: Unifying the Philosophy and Psychology of Well-being.
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Original: Iolanda Costa Galinha & José Luís Pais-Ribeiro (2011), Cognitive, affective and contextual predictors of subjective wellbeing .
Revised: Iolanda Costa Galinha & José Luís Pais-Ribeiro (2011), Cognitive, affective and contextual predictors of subjective wellbeing ,
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Original:  Syngman Rhee became the first President of  Korea following the May 1948 general election, and the National Assembly in Seoul promulgated South Korea's first constitution in July establishing a democratic presidential system of government.
Revised:  Syngman Rhee became the first President of South Korea following the May 1948 general election, and the National Assembly in Seoul promulgated South Korea's first constitution in July establishing a democratic presidential system of government.
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Original:  Syngman Rhee became the first President of South Korea following the May 1948 general election, and the National Assembly in Seoul promulgated South Korea's first constitution in July establishing a democratic presidential system of government.
Revised:  Syngman Rhee became the first President of South Korea following the May 1948 general election, and the National Assembly in Seoul promulgated South Korea's first constitution in July , establishing a presidential system of government.
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Original:  The First Republic claimed sovereignty over the entire Korean Peninsula but only held power south of the 38th parallel until the end of the Korean War in 1953  when the border was modified.
Revised:  The First Republic claimed sovereignty over the entire Korean Peninsula but only held power south of the 38th parallel until the end of the Korean War in 1953 , when the border was modified.
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