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Original:  They incorporate traces of transition metals mainly via cation exchange in their interlayer like clay minerals and other stronger adsorption processes such as surface complexation by formation of inner sphere complexes at the oxide surface as it is also the case with hydrous ferric oxides, HFO. Slight variations in their crystallographic structure and mineralogical composition may result in considerable changes in their chemical reactivity.
Revised:  They incorporate traces of transition metals mainly via cation exchange in their interlayer like clay minerals and surface complexation by formation of inner sphere complexes at the oxide surface as it is also the case with hydrous ferric oxides, HFO. Slight variations in their crystallographic structure and mineralogical composition may result in considerable changes in their chemical reactivity.
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Original: Vitamin A2 is a subcategory of vitamin A which is composed of several subforms, including the major one vitamin A1 in the form of retinol, retinyl esters, retinal, and provitamin A carotenoids , vitamin A2, the likely non-human-relevant vitamin A3,4, and the newly postulated vitamin A5 . Dehydroretinal (3,4-dehydroretinal)
Revised: Vitamin A2 is a subcategory of vitamin A , including vitamin A1 in the form of retinol, retinyl esters, retinal, and provitamin A carotenoids , vitamin A2, the likely non-human-relevant vitamin A3,4, and the newly postulated vitamin A5 . Dehydroretinal (3,4-dehydroretinal)
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Original: Vitamin A2 is a subcategory of vitamin A which is composed of several subforms, including the major one vitamin A1 in the form of retinol, retinyl esters, retinal, and provitamin A carotenoids , vitamin A2, the likely non-human-relevant vitamin A3,4, and the newly postulated vitamin A5 . Dehydroretinal (3,4-dehydroretinal)
Revised: Vitamin A2 is a subcategory of vitamin A which is composed of several subforms, including the major one vitamin A1 in the form of retinol, retinyl esters, retinal, and provitamin A carotenoids . Dehydroretinal (3,4-dehydroretinal)
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Original:  belongs to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3,4-dehydroretinol (vitamin A2 alcohol), and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid (vitamin A2 acid).
Revised:  belongs to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenous 3,4-dehydroretinol (vitamin A2 alcohol), and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid (vitamin A2 acid).
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Original: This method is depends upon parameters like bath temperature,pH of the solution,Molarity of concentration and time.
Revised: This method depends upon parameters like bath temperature,pH of the solution,Molarity of concentration and time.
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Original:  It is also known as chemical solution deposition (CSD) , first described in 1869. it can be employed for large-area batch processing or continuous deposition.
Revised:  It is also known as chemical solution deposition (CSD) , first described in 1869. It can be employed for large-area batch processing or continuous deposition.
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Original:  Chemical Bath Bruckman This technique is extensively used to deposit buffer layers in thin film photo voltaic cells.
Revised:  Chemical Bath Bruckman This technique is extensively used to deposit buffer layers in thin film photovoltaic cells.
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Original:  The growth of thin films strongly depends on growth conditions, such as duration of deposition, composition and temperature of the solution, and topographical and chemical nature of the substrate. 
Revised:  The growth of thin films strongly depends on growth conditions, such as duration of deposition, composition and temperature of the solution, and topographical and chemical nature of the substrate. ok
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Original:  One of the drawbacks of this method is the wastage of  solution after every deposition.
Revised:  One of the drawbacks of this method is the wastage of the solution after every deposition.
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Original:  Chemical bath deposition yields stable, adherent, uniform  and hard films with good reproducibility by a relatively simple process.
Revised:  Chemical bath deposition yields stable, adherent, uniform , and hard films with good reproducibility by a relatively simple process.
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Original:  The growth of thin films strongly depends on growth conditions, such as duration of deposition, composition  and temperature of the solution, and topographical and chemical nature of the substrate.
Revised:  The growth of thin films strongly depends on growth conditions, such as duration of deposition, composition , and temperature of the solution, and topographical and chemical nature of the substrate.
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Original:  This method depends upon parameters like bath temperature, pH of the solution,  molarity of concentration  and time. 
Revised:  This method depends upon parameters like bath temperature, pH of the solution, the molarity of concentration and time. 
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Original:  This method depends upon parameters like bath temperature, pH of the solution,  molarity of concentration  and time. 
Revised:  This method depends upon parameters like bath temperature, pH of the solution, molarity of concentration , and time. 
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Original:  One of the drawbacks of this method is the wastage of the solution after every deposition  .
Revised:  One of the drawbacks of this method is the wastage of the solution after every deposition Nanomaterials Chemical Bath Deposition has great applications in the field of nanomaterials, because the small crystal size enables formation on the nanometer scale, because the properties and nanostructure of Chemical Bath Deposition films can be precisely controlled, and because the uniform thickness, composition, and geometry of films deposited by Chemical Bath Deposition allows the film to retain the structure of the substrate. The low cost and high reliability of Chemical Bath Deposition even on the nanometer scale is unlike any other thin-film deposition technique .
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Original:  Chemical bath deposition does not cause physical damage in the substrate          ]  ]   Category: Thin film depositi 
Revised:  Chemical bath deposition does not cause physical damage in the substrate ] ] Category: Thin film deposition 
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Original: Criticism = High prices for tariffs and services The State Committee on Tariffs set unreasonable prices for heat and hot water and energy to the population, which were higher than in Moscow and other economically developed regions of the country.
Revised: Criticism High prices for tariffs and services The State Committee on Tariffs set unreasonable prices for heat and hot water and energy to the population, which were higher than in Moscow and other economically developed regions of the country.
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Original:  In Ufa, the same service, according to the resolution of the State Committee of the Republic No. 780 of December 19, 2017, for consumers of "BashRTS" lTd of Inter RAO is 2,045.57 rubles per Gcal from July 1, 2018.
Revised:  In Ufa, the same service, according to the resolution of the State Committee of the Republic No. 780 of December 19, 2017, for consumers of "BashRTS" Ltd of Inter RAO is 2,045.57 rubles per Gcal from July 1, 2018.
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Original:  , ) (born August 18, 1954) is a Russian politician and engineer , currently serving as the 2nd Head of the Republic of Bashkortostan since July 19, 2010 , and was re-elected for his second term on September 14, 2014.
Revised:  , ) (born August 18, 1954) is a Russian politician and engineer who served as the 2nd Head of the Republic of Bashkortostan since July 19, 2010 , and was re-elected for his second term on September 14, 2014.
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Original:  , ) (born August 18, 1954) is a Russian politician and engineer , currently serving as the 2nd Head of the Republic of Bashkortostan since July 19, 2010 , and was re-elected for his second term on September 14, 2014.
Revised:  , ) (born August 18, 1954) is a Russian politician and engineer , currently serving as the 2nd Head of the Republic of Bashkortostan from July 19, 2010 , and was re-elected for his second term on September 14, 2014.
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Original:  Many of Sachay's family members are known to recite in his manner in Canada, the USA, and Karachi till this day.  
Revised:  Many of Sachay's family members are known to recite in his manner in Canada, the USA, and Karachi till this day. References 
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Original:  He was born to a family of descendants of 8th Imam of Shia Muslims, Imam Ali ar-Ridha (A.S.) in 1940.
Revised:  He was born to a family of descendants of 8th Imam of Shia Muslims, Imam Ali ar-Ridha in 1940.
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Original:  Sachay Bhai and Ali Zia Rizvi are 2 Nauhakhwan that is often remembered worldwide.
Revised:  Sachay Bhai is a Nauhakhwan that is often remembered worldwide.
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Original:  He was also the pioneer of establishing the first Shab-e-Dari program in the United States at Mehfil-e-Shah-e-Khurasan with Anjumane Nawjawanane Ali Akber .
Revised:  He was also the pioneer of establishing the first Shab-e-Dari program in the United States at Mehfil-e-Shah-e-Khurasan .
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Original: Cardiac pressure-volume loops 600px|alt=|Figure 1: Idealized pressure-volume diagram featuring cardiac cycle components.
Revised: Cardiac pressure–volume loops 600px|alt=|Figure 1: Idealized pressure-volume diagram featuring cardiac cycle components.
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Original: Cardiac pressure-volume loops 600px|alt=|Figure 1: Idealized pressure-volume diagram featuring cardiac cycle components.
Revised: Cardiac pressure-volume loops 600px|alt=|Figure 1: Idealized pressure–volume diagram featuring cardiac cycle components.
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Original:  Real-time left ventricular (LV) pressure-volume loops provide a framework for understanding cardiac mechanics in experimental animals and humans.
Revised:  Real-time left ventricular (LV) pressure–volume loops provide a framework for understanding cardiac mechanics in experimental animals and humans.
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Original:  A considerable amount of information on cardiac performance can be determined from the pressure vs. volume plot ( pressure-volume diagram).
Revised:  A considerable amount of information on cardiac performance can be determined from the pressure vs. volume plot ( pressure–volume diagram).
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Original:  Pressure–volume parameters Stroke volume Stroke volume  (SV) is the volume of blood ejected by the right/left ventricle in a single contraction.
Revised:  Pressure–volume parameters Stroke volume (SV) is the volume of blood ejected by the right/left ventricle in a single contraction.
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Original:  Pressure–volume parameters Stroke volume Stroke volume  (SV) is the volume of blood ejected by the right/left ventricle in a single contraction.
Revised:  Pressure–volume parameters Stroke volume Stroke volume Stroke volume (SV) is the volume of blood ejected by the right/left ventricle in a single contraction.
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Original:  Increased left ventricular hypertrophy with increased EDV and SV is seen with athletes and in healthy normal elderly URL Moderate hypertrophy allows for a lower heart rate, increased diastolic volume, and thus higher stroke volume.
Revised:  Increased left ventricular hypertrophy with increased EDV and SV is seen with athletes and in healthy normal elderly individuals. Moderate hypertrophy allows for a lower heart rate, increased diastolic volume, and thus higher stroke volume.
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Original:  Stroke volume essentially matches the term Ejection Fraction 
Revised:  Stroke volume essentially matches the term Ejection Fraction .
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Original: Concerns with the Janzen–Connell hypothesis Many studies examining the Janzen–Connell hypothesis have shown supporting patterns with a number of tree species, but despite this there are also problematic aspects of the hypothesis.
Revised: Problematic aspects Many studies examining the Janzen–Connell hypothesis have shown supporting patterns with a number of tree species, but despite this there are also problematic aspects of the hypothesis.
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Original: Dissenting Research Studies questioning the Janzen–Connell hypothesis: Hyatt et al. examined the hypothesis across a number of tree species (rather than focusing on the effects on just one) and found no support for the distance-dependence of the hypothesis and concluded that the Janzen–Connell hypothesis was not a mechanism for diversity.
Revised: Dissenting research Studies questioning the Janzen–Connell hypothesis: Hyatt et al. examined the hypothesis across a number of tree species (rather than focusing on the effects on just one) and found no support for the distance-dependence of the hypothesis and concluded that the Janzen–Connell hypothesis was not a mechanism for diversity.
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Original:  The Janzen-Connell hypothesis has been called a special case of keystone predation, predator partitioning or the pest pressure hypothesis.
Revised:  The Janzen–Connell hypothesis has been called a special case of keystone predation, predator partitioning or the pest pressure hypothesis.
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Original:  The Janzen-Connell hypothesis expands on this, by claiming that the natural enemies are not only specialists, but also are distance-responsive or density-responsive.
Revised:  The Janzen–Connell hypothesis expands on this, by claiming that the natural enemies are not only specialists, but also are distance-responsive or density-responsive.
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Original:  The Black Cherry is one such example of a temperate forest species whose growth patterns can still be explained by the Janzen–Connell hypothesis.
Revised:  The black cherry is one such example of a temperate forest species whose growth patterns can still be explained by the Janzen–Connell hypothesis.
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Original:  The Black Cherry is one such example of a temperate forest species whose growth patterns can still be explained by the Janzen–Connell hypothesis.
Revised:  The Black Cherry is one such example of a temperate forest species whose growth patterns can be explained by the Janzen–Connell hypothesis.
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Original:  Where β is the transmission rate or infectiousness of the disease, L is the average infection time of the host, and S is the density of the host population.
Revised:  where β is the transmission rate or infectiousness of the disease, L is the average infection time of the host, and S is the density of the host population.
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Original:  The first is that the Janzen–Connell hypothesis explains diversity at a community-wide scale, but most studies have only looked at a single species or a localized region.
Revised:  The Janzen–Connell hypothesis explains diversity at a community-wide scale, but most studies have only looked at a single species or a localized region.
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Original:  Thus, specialist predation also impacts adult density, rather than just juveniles which has been the focus of research efforts.
Revised:  Thus, specialist predation also impacts adult density, rather than just that of juveniles, the latter of which has been the focus of research efforts.
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Original:  The responses of density-dependent predators' may not be restricted to a single trophic level, and when multiple trophic levels interact, Janzen-Connell effects may be negated.
Revised:  The responses of density-dependent predators' may not be restricted to a single trophic level, and when multiple trophic levels interact, Janzen–Connell effects may be negated.
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Original:  Supporting research There have been over 50 studies designed to test predictions of this hypothesis in tropical and other settings  and most show that many tree species exhibit patterns consistent with Janzen–Connell effects.
Revised:  Supporting research There have been over 50 studies designed to test predictions of this hypothesis in tropical and other settings , and most show that many tree species exhibit patterns consistent with Janzen–Connell effects.
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Original:  This study suggests that the predator/density mechanism that promotes species diversity is not contained to tropical forests alone – even if tropical ecosystems do have the highest diversity.
Revised:  This study suggests that the predator/density mechanism that promotes species diversity is not contained to tropical forests alone , even if tropical ecosystems do have the highest diversity.
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Original:  See also ecological fitting
Revised:  See also Ecological fitting
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Original:   Bose is married to a Pakistani American Historian Ayesha URL Bose's brother, Sumantra Bose, teaches at the London School of Economics;
Revised:  URL Bose is married to a Pakistani American Historian Ayesha URL Bose's brother, Sumantra Bose, teaches at the London School of Economics;
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Original:   Bose is married to a Pakistani American Historian Ayesha URL Bose's brother, Sumantra Bose, teaches at the London School of Economics;
Revised:  Bose is married to accomplished Pakistani American Historian Ayesha URL Bose's brother, Sumantra Bose, teaches at the London School of Economics;
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Original:  However, Bose's delineation of that economy has been criticised for not going much beyond India and Indians, for reducing the complex exchange between the British and India to a clash of Indian nationalism and British tyranny ;
Revised:  However, Bose's delineation of that economy has been criticised for not going much beyond India and Indians, for reducing the complex exchange between the British and India to a clash of Indian nationalism and British authoritarianism ;
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Original:  Bose is married to a Pakistani American Historian Ayesha URL
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Original: The grandnephew of Indian nationalist Subhas Chandra Bose and grandson of nationalist Sarat Chandra Bose, Bose is the son of former Trinamool Congress parliamentarian Krishna Bose and paediatrician Sisir Kumar Bose.
Revised: The grandnephew of Indian nationalist Subhas Chandra Bose and grandson of nationalist Sarat Chandra Bose, Bose is the son of former Trinamool Congress parliamentarian Krishna Bose and paediatrician Sisir Kumar URL
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Original: The grandnephew of Indian nationalist Subhas Chandra Bose and grandson of nationalist Sarat Chandra Bose, Bose is the son of former Trinamool Congress parliamentarian Krishna Bose and paediatrician Sisir Kumar URL Bose's brother, Sumantra Bose, teaches at the London School of Economics;
Revised: The grandnephew of Indian nationalist Subhas Chandra Bose and grandson of nationalist Sarat Chandra Bose, Bose is the son of former Trinamool Congress parliamentarian Krishna Bose and paediatrician Sisir Kumar Bose. Bose's brother, Sumantra Bose, teaches at the London School of Economics;
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Original: Bowman–Manifold 1923, p. 25Downes 1938, pp. 705–7 Landing stores near Gaza Railway Construction Team They constructed the duplication of the Zagazig to Ismailia section of the railway from Cairo to the Suez Canal, built metalled roads out into the Sinai desert and laid water pipelines.
Revised: Bowman–Manifold 1923, p. 25Downes 1938, pp. 705–7 Landing stores near Gaza Railway Construction Team The corps constructed the duplication of the Zagazig to Ismailia section of the railway from Cairo to the Suez Canal, built metalled roads out into the Sinai desert and laid water pipelines.
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Original:  At the beginning of December 1916, the Egyptian Expeditionary Force had a ration strength of 150,000 British and 6,000 Indian troops, and 13,000 Egyptian labourers.
Revised:  At the beginning of December 1916, the Egyptian Expeditionary Force had a strength of 150,000 British and 6,000 Indian troops, and 13,000 Egyptian labourers.
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Original: Bruce 2002, p. 80–1 At this time General Harry Chauvel ordered the aerial bombing of the enemy to stop as the retaliation by German planes on the Egyptian Labour Corps was stopping the railway gangs from continuing the strategically vital railway on to Rafah.
Revised: Bruce 2002, p. 80–1 At this time General Harry Chauvel ordered the aerial bombing of the enemy to stop as retaliation against German aerial attacks on the Egyptian Labour Corps was stopping the railway gangs from continuing the strategically vital railway on to Rafah.
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Original: Bruce 2002, p. 80–1 At this time General Harry Chauvel ordered the aerial bombing of the enemy to stop as the retaliation by German planes on the Egyptian Labour Corps was stopping the railway gangs from continuing the strategically vital railway on to Rafah.
Revised: Bruce 2002, p. 80–1 At this time General Harry Chauvel ordered the aerial bombing of the enemy to stop as the retaliation by German planes on the Egyptian Labour Corps , which stopped the railway gangs from continuing the strategically vital railway on to Rafah.
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Original:  When money and food were not enough, military authority under the terms of the Protectorate and Martial Law was imposed over all Egyptian officials and civilians.
Revised:  When money and food were not enough, military authority under the terms of the protectorate was imposed over all Egyptian officials and civilians.
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Original:  Then , for a consideration, the Muidir, Lord Lieutenant or Omdah, mayors of Egyptian towns , organised press gangs and the necessary native armed guards to keep the forced labour at work .
Revised:  Then the Muidir, Lord Lieutenant or Omdah, mayors of Egyptian towns , organised press gangs and the necessary native armed guards to keep the forced labour at work .
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Original:  Then , for a consideration, the Muidir, Lord Lieutenant or Omdah, mayors of Egyptian towns , organised press gangs and the necessary native armed guards to keep the forced labour at work .
Revised:  Then , for a consideration, the Muidir, Lord Lieutenant or Omdah, mayors of Egyptian towns would organise press gangs and the necessary native armed guards to keep the forced labour at work .
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Original:  Then , for a consideration, the Muidir, Lord Lieutenant or Omdah, mayors of Egyptian towns , organised press gangs and the necessary native armed guards to keep the forced labour at work .
Revised:  Then , for a consideration, the Muidir, Lord Lieutenant or Omdah, mayors of Egyptian towns , organised press gangs and the necessary number armed guards to keep the forced labour at work .
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Original:  Then , for a consideration, the Muidir, Lord Lieutenant or Omdah, mayors of Egyptian towns , organised press gangs and the necessary native armed guards to keep the forced labour at work .
Revised:  Then , for a consideration, the Muidir, Lord Lieutenant or Omdah, mayors of Egyptian towns , organised press gangs and the necessary native armed guards to keep the labourers from stirring up trouble .
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Original: Letter Wingate to Allenby, 8 May 1918 in Hughes 2004, pp. 154–5 [[File:Adinkerke Military Cemetery04.jpg|Grave of Sabit Harun Mohamed, Egyptian Labour Corps, in Adinkerke Military Cemetery, Belgium  ]] By 1917 the Egyptian Labour Corps had over 55,000 labourers, mainly organized into companies with 12 gangs forming one company.
Revised: Letter Wingate to Allenby, 8 May 1918 in Hughes 2004, pp. 154–5 [[File:Adinkerke Military Cemetery04.jpg|Grave of Sabit Harun Mohamed, Egyptian Labour Corps, in Adinkerke Military Cemetery, Belgium . ]] By 1917 the Egyptian Labour Corps had over 55,000 labourers, mainly organized into companies with 12 gangs forming one company.
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