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Original:  This move seemed baffling to some, as the Calvinist and Boer patriot general Hertzog was a staunch proponent of Afrikaans language rights, especially in education.
Revised:  That move seemed baffling to some, as the Calvinist and Boer patriot general Hertzog was a staunch proponent of Afrikaans language rights, especially in education.
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Original:  This move seemed baffling to some, as the Calvinist and Boer patriot general Hertzog was a staunch proponent of Afrikaans language rights, especially in education.
Revised:  This move seemed baffling to some, because the Calvinist and Boer patriot general Hertzog was a staunch proponent of Afrikaans language rights, especially in education.
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Original:  This move seemed baffling to some, as the Calvinist and Boer patriot general Hertzog was a staunch proponent of Afrikaans language rights, especially in education.
Revised:  This move seemed baffling to some, as the Calvinist and Boer patriot General Hertzog was a staunch proponent of Afrikaans language rights, especially in education.
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Original:  In 1910, after the birth of the Union of South Africa, general Hertzog was appointed in a dual portfolio as Minister of Justice and Minister of Native Affairs.
Revised:  In 1910, after the birth of the Union of South Africa, General Hertzog was appointed in a dual portfolio as Minister of Justice and Minister of Native Affairs.
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Original:  His father sent him to the Arcadia Skool, but Albert was disappointed that the school had a headmistress , and, though in the city, differed nothing from a farm school.
Revised:  His father sent Albert to the Arcadia Skool, but Albert was disappointed that the school had a headmistress , and, though in the city, differed nothing from a farm school.
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Original:  His father sent him to the Arcadia Skool, but Albert was disappointed that the school had a headmistress , and, though in the city, differed nothing from a farm school.
Revised:  His father sent him to the Arcadia Skool, but Albert was disappointed that it had a headmistress , and, though in the city, differed nothing from a farm school.
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Original:  His father sent him to the Arcadia Skool, but Albert was disappointed that the school had a headmistress , and, though in the city, differed nothing from a farm school.
Revised:  His father sent him to the Arcadia Skool, but Albert was disappointed that the school had a headmistress and, though in the city, differed nothing from a farm school.
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Original:  His father sent him to the Arcadia Skool, but Albert was disappointed that the school had a headmistress , and, though in the city, differed nothing from a farm school.
Revised:  His father sent him to the Arcadia Skool, but Albert was disappointed that the school had a headmistress , and, though in the city, was no different to a farm school.
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Original:  Although only eleven years old, Albert left on the afternoon of his first day, and enrolled at Pretoria Boys High School.
Revised:  Although only eleven years old, he left on the afternoon of his first day, and enrolled at Pretoria Boys High School.
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Original:  After the schism between general Hertzog and Prime Minister Louis Botha, which led to Hertzog's dismissal from the cabinet, the family moved back to Bloemfontein, where Albert attended Grey College.
Revised:  After the schism between General Hertzog and Prime Minister Louis Botha, which led to Hertzog's dismissal from the cabinet, the family moved back to Bloemfontein, where Albert attended Grey College.
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Original:  He matriculated with a First Class in 1916, with the subjects Dutch, English, Latin, Mathematics, and Physical Science.
Revised:  He matriculated in 1916, with the subjects Dutch, English, Latin, Mathematics, and Physical Science.
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Original:  He matriculated with a First Class in 1916, with the subjects Dutch, English, Latin, Mathematics, and Physical Science.
Revised:  He matriculated with a First Class in 1916, having studied Dutch, English, Latin, Mathematics, and Physical Science.
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Original:  After finishing high school Hertzog enrolled at the University of Stellenbosch in 1917.
Revised:  After finishing his secondary education, Hertzog enrolled at the University of Stellenbosch in 1917.
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Original:  On 1 April 1920  he was awarded the BA cum laude with the following subjects: Dutch, Latin, English, Greek, Chemistry and Mathematics in 1917 ;
Revised:  On 1 April 1920 , he was awarded the BA cum laude with the following subjects: Dutch, Latin, English, Greek, Chemistry and Mathematics in 1917 ;
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Original:  On 1 April 1920  he was awarded the BA cum laude with the following subjects: Dutch, Latin, English, Greek, Chemistry and Mathematics in 1917 ;
Revised:  On 1 April 1920 he was awarded a BA cum laude with the following subjects: Dutch, Latin, English, Greek, Chemistry and Mathematics in 1917 ;
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Original:  On 1 April 1920  he was awarded the BA cum laude with the following subjects: Dutch, Latin, English, Greek, Chemistry and Mathematics in 1917 ;
Revised:  On 1 April 1920 he was awarded the BA cum laude , having studied Dutch, Latin, English, Greek, Chemistry and Mathematics in 1917 ;
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Original:  On 1 April 1920  he was awarded the BA cum laude with the following subjects: Dutch, Latin, English, Greek, Chemistry and Mathematics in 1917 ;
Revised:  On 1 April 1920 he was awarded the BA cum laude with the following subjects: Dutch, Latin, English, Greek, Chemistry and Mathematics in 1917 ,
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Original:  Political Science, Psychology and Latin in 1918 ;
Revised:  Political Science, Psychology and Latin in 1918 ,
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Original:  and Ethics, Logic and Political economy in 1919.
Revised:  and Ethics, Logic and Political Economy in 1919.
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Original:  Two years  , he enrolled at New College, Oxford, to further read Law.
Revised:  Two years later , he enrolled at New College, Oxford, to further read Law.
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Original:  Member of Parliament (1948–1958) In the election of 1948, where the National Party under leadership of dr . Danie Malan came into power, Hertzog was elected member of parliament for Ermelo in the Eastern Transvaal.
Revised:  Member of Parliament (1948–1958) In the election of 1948, at which the National Party under leadership of dr . Danie Malan came into power, Hertzog was elected member of parliament for Ermelo in the Eastern Transvaal.
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Original:  Member of Parliament (1948–1958) In the election of 1948, where the National Party under leadership of dr . Danie Malan came into power, Hertzog was elected member of parliament for Ermelo in the Eastern Transvaal.
Revised:  Member of Parliament (1948–1958) In the election of 1948, where the National Party under leadership of Dr . Danie Malan came into power, Hertzog was elected member of parliament for Ermelo in the Eastern Transvaal.
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Original:  Member of Parliament (1948–1958) In the election of 1948, where the National Party under leadership of dr . Danie Malan came into power, Hertzog was elected member of parliament for Ermelo in the Eastern Transvaal.
Revised:  Member of Parliament (1948–1958) In the election of 1948, where the National Party under leadership of dr . Danie Malan came to power, Hertzog was elected member of parliament for Ermelo in the Eastern Transvaal.
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Original:  When Dr. Hendrik Verwoerd was elected Prime Minister in 1958, he appointed Hertzog as  cabinet minister with the dual portfolios of Post and Telecommunications and Health.
Revised:  When Dr. Hendrik Verwoerd was elected Prime Minister in 1958, he appointed Hertzog as a cabinet minister with the dual portfolios of Post and Telecommunications and Health.
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Original:  Albert Hertzog outside the hall where, moments before, he was kicked out of the National Party , on the evening of 4 October 1969.
Revised:  Albert Hertzog outside the hall where, moments before, on the evening of 4 October 1969, he had been kicked out of the National Party , on the evening of 4 October 1969.
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Original:  Albert Hertzog outside the hall where, moments before, he was kicked out of the National Party , on the evening of 4 October 1969.
Revised:  Albert Hertzog outside the hall where, moments before, he was kicked out of the National Party .
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Original:  This threefold division would soon be simplified in the colloquial language to a simpler dichotomous partition between simply verlig and verkramp.
Revised:  That threefold division would soon be simplified in the colloquial language to a simpler dichotomous partition between simply verlig and verkramp.
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Original:  This threefold division would soon be simplified in the colloquial language to a simpler dichotomous partition between simply verlig and verkramp.
Revised:  This threefold division would soon be simplified in the colloquial language to a simpler dichotomy between simply verlig and verkramp.
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Original:  De Klerk labeled the verkrampte Afrikaner as follows: “ His fundamental axiom is: adherence to the extant, to the old ideas and customs and content is the test for being Afrikaner.
Revised:  De Klerk labeled the verkrampte Afrikaner as follows: " His fundamental axiom is: adherence to the extant, to the old ideas and customs and content is the test for being Afrikaner.
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Original:  ” The verlig-verkramp-strife came to the fore after the assassination of Hendrik Verwoerd.
Revised:  " The verlig-verkramp-strife came to the fore after the assassination of Hendrik Verwoerd.
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Original:  Differences that had been existing for a number of years began to manifest publicly, especially in the early days of new premier John Vorster's term.
Revised:  Differences that had existed for a number of years began to manifest publicly, especially in the early days of new premier John Vorster's term.
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Original:  During his retirement, Hertzog could devote more time to his numerous business endeavors and his hobby of gardening.
Revised:  During his retirement, Hertzog could devote more time to his numerous business endeavours and his hobby of gardening.
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Original:  In a press interview in 1979 he opined as follows: “ In my view our political landscape is developing in the direction of a large, new conservative party which will consist of different people who are still currently trying to tread their own path.
Revised:  In a press interview in 1979 he opined as follows: " In my view our political landscape is developing in the direction of a large, new conservative party which will consist of different people who are still currently trying to tread their own path.
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Original:  It can be a party consisting of the Treurnicht people in the NP, the Connie Mulder people, the HNP and definitely also conservative English speakers .” This proved to be prophetic, as in 1982 a massive split occurred within the ruling National Party, and the Conservative Party came into being, with Andries Treurnicht as leader.
Revised:  It can be a party consisting of the Treurnicht people in the NP, the Connie Mulder people, the HNP and definitely also conservative English speakers ". This proved to be prophetic, as in 1982 a massive split occurred within the ruling National Party, and the Conservative Party came into being, with Andries Treurnicht as leader.
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Original: The son of famed Boer general and later South African Prime Minister Barry Hertzog and his wife Mynie (born Neethling), Albert Hertzog was born on 4 July 1899 in his parental home, 19 Goddard Street, Bloemfontein.
Revised: Ehe son of famed Boer general and later South African Prime Minister Barry Hertzog and his wife Mynie (born Neethling), Albert Hertzog was born on 4 July 1899 in his parental home, 19 Goddard Street, Bloemfontein.
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Original: Ehe son of famed Boer general and later South African Prime Minister Barry Hertzog and his wife Mynie (born Neethling), Albert Hertzog was born on 4 July 1899 in his parental home, 19 Goddard Street, Bloemfontein.
Revised: The son of famed Boer general and later South African Prime Minister Barry Hertzog and his wife Mynie (born Neethling), Albert Hertzog was born on 4 July 1899 in his parental home, 19 Goddard Street, Bloemfontein.
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Original: Albert Hetzog served as the South African Minister of Health from 1954 to 1958 and as Minister of Post and Telecommunications from 1958 to 1968.
Revised: Albert Hertzog served as the South African Minister of Health from 1954 to 1958 and as Minister of Post and Telecommunications from 1958 to 1968.
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Original: Members of the House of Assembly of South Africa Category:Members of the Reformed Churches in South Africa Ministers of Health in South Africa Minister of Posts, Telecommunications and Broadcasting in South Africa Category:National Party (South Africa) politicians Category:People from Bloemfontein Category: People from Orange Free State  Category:South African anti-communists Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African people of German desce
Revised: Members of the House of Assembly of South Africa Category:Members of the Reformed Churches in South Africa Ministers of Health in South Africa Minister of Posts, Telecommunications and Broadcasting in South Africa Category:National Party (South Africa) politicians Category:People from Bloemfontein Category: Orange Free State Category:South African anti-communists Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African people of German desce
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Original: Members of the House of Assembly of South Africa Category:Members of the Reformed Churches in South Africa Ministers of Health in South Africa Minister of Posts, Telecommunications and Broadcasting in South Africa Category:National Party (South Africa) politicians Category:People from Bloemfontein Category: People from Orange Free State  Category:South African anti-communists Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African people of German desce
Revised: Members of the House of Assembly of South Africa Category:Members of the Reformed Churches in South Africa Ministers of Health in South Africa Minister of Posts, Telecommunications and Broadcasting in South Africa Category:National Party (South Africa) politicians Category:People from Bloemfontein Category: People from Orange Free State people Category:South African anti-communists Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African people of German desce
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Original:  Her notable role after her first film is in Romi Meitei's Khangdreda Nongdamba, where she plays a supporting role alongside Kamala Saikhom.
Revised:  Her notable role after her first film was in Romi Meitei's Khangdreda Nongdamba, where she plays a supporting role alongside Kamala Saikhom.
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Original:  Her notable role after her first film is in Romi Meitei's Khangdreda Nongdamba, where she plays a supporting role alongside Kamala Saikhom.
Revised:  Her notable role after her first film is in Romi Meitei's Khangdreda Nongdamba, where she played a supporting role alongside Kamala Saikhom.
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Original:  Thanil Dinesh Tongbram Eikhoi Pabunggi Engellei Hemanta Khuman Kum Kang Kum Kabi Chang Tharo Bishwamittra 2016 Moreh Maru Bala O. Gautam Tharo Thambal Tharo Bijgupta Laishram Khongfam Tampha Sudhir Kangjam Sor Usha Ajit Ningthouja 2017 Iche Tampha Thadoi Bijgupta Laishram Mitlu Thaarlin Gyaneshwor Konj Mani Mamou Ningthibee Ajit Ningthouja Mr. Khadang Thadoi Chou En Lai Chinglen Sana Langlen Bijgupta Laishram Best Actor - Supporting Role Kaongamdraba Facebook  AK.
Revised:  Thanil Dinesh Tongbram Eikhoi Pabunggi Engellei Hemanta Khuman Kum Kang Kum Kabi Chang Tharo Bishwamittra 2016 Moreh Maru Bala O. Gautam Tharo Thambal Tharo Bijgupta Laishram Khongfam Tampha Sudhir Kangjam Sor Usha Ajit Ningthouja 2017 Iche Tampha Thadoi Bijgupta Laishram Mitlu Thaarlin Gyaneshwor Konj Mani Mamou Ningthibee Ajit Ningthouja Mr. Khadang Thadoi Chou En Lai Chinglen Sana Langlen Bijgupta Laishram Best Actor - Supporting Role Kaongamdraba Facebook Tampha AK.
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Original: Kao Phaaba Matouleibi Ishomani Ichadi Manini Yaiphabi Geet Yumnam Inamma Memtombi Homeshwori Won Best Actress at 9th MANIFA 2020 Namase Chaphu Huranbini Memsana Herojit Naoroibam Wakchingi Len Yaiphabi Bijgupta Laishram Mutlamdai Thaomei Thaballei Sudhir Kangjam Thabaton 3 Nungsithoi Bijgupta Laishram Chanu IPS 2 Laija Sanaton Nongthomba Mamal Naidraba Thamoi Nurei Gyanand Eerei Eethak Krishnakumar Gurumayum 2020 Aronba Wari OC Meira 15 August Krishnand Ningombam 2021 Sibu Einaro Chou-En-Lai 
Revised: Kao Phaaba Matouleibi Ishomani Ichadi Manini Yaiphabi Geet Yumnam Inamma Memtombi Homeshwori Won Best Actress at 9th MANIFA 2020 Namase Chaphu Huranbini Memsana Herojit Naoroibam Wakchingi Len Yaiphabi Bijgupta Laishram Mutlamdai Thaomei Thaballei Sudhir Kangjam Thabaton 3 Nungsithoi Bijgupta Laishram Chanu IPS 2 Laija Sanaton Nongthomba Mamal Naidraba Thamoi Nurei Gyanand Eerei Eethak Krishnakumar Gurumayum 2020 Aronba Wari OC Meira 15 August Krishnand Ningombam 2021 Sibu Einaro Chou-En-Lai 2022 Ningol L. Surjakanta
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Original: Selected filmography +Key Denotes films that have not yet been released Year Title Role(s)
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Original: Tombi Chou En Lai 2019 Kao Phaaba Matouleibi Ishomani Ichadi Manini Yaiphabi Geet Yumnam Inamma Memtombi Homeshwori Won Best Actress at 9th MANIFA 2020 Namase Chaphu Huranbini Memsana Herojit Naoroibam Wakchingi Len Yaiphabi Bijgupta Laishram Mutlamdai Thaomei Thaballei Sudhir Kangjam Thabaton 3 Nungsithoi Bijgupta Laishram Chanu IPS 2 Laija Sanaton Nongthomba Mamal Naidraba Thamoi Nurei Gyanand Eerei Eethak Krishnakumar Gurumayum 2020 Aronba Wari OC Meira 15 August  Krishnand Ningombam
Revised: Tombi Chou En Lai 2019 Kao Phaaba Matouleibi Ishomani Ichadi Manini Yaiphabi Geet Yumnam Inamma Memtombi Homeshwori Won Best Actress at 9th MANIFA 2020 Namase Chaphu Huranbini Memsana Herojit Naoroibam Wakchingi Len Yaiphabi Bijgupta Laishram Mutlamdai Thaomei Thaballei Sudhir Kangjam Thabaton 3 Nungsithoi Bijgupta Laishram Chanu IPS 2 Laija Sanaton Nongthomba Mamal Naidraba Thamoi Nurei Gyanand Eerei Eethak Krishnakumar Gurumayum 2020 Aronba Wari OC Meira 15 August : A Love Story Krishnand Ningombam
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Original:  Debut film 2008 Khangdreda Nongdamba Bala Romi Meitei 2009 Panthungee Wangmada Linthoi Yoimayai Mongsaba 2010 Imagi Laman Singamdre Niti Romi Meitei Kadar Mapee Nungthil Chaibi L. Prakash 21st Century's Kunti Kethabi Joy Soram 2011 Loibataare Ta Raju Molly Pilu H. Luhongbagi Ahing Purnima Bijgupta Laishram 2012 Taru Tarubi Maktabee Maktabee Tej Kshetri Mami Lily Jeetendra Ningomba Yaiskulgee Pakhang Angaoba Majaru Homen D'
Revised:  Debut film 2008 Khangdreda Nongdamba Bala Romi Meitei 2009 Panthungee Wangmada Linthoi Yoimayai Mongsaba 2010 Imagi Laman Singamdre Niti Romi Meitei Kadar Mapee Nungthil Chaibi L. Prakash 21st Century's Kunti Kethabi Joy Soram 2011 Loibataare Ta Raju Molly Pilu H. Luhongbagi Ahing Purnima Bijgupta Laishram Yaiskulgee Pakhang Angaoba Majaru Homen D'
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Original:  Notes 2006Tellanga MameiBimol's sisterOken AmakchamChild Artist, Debut film 2008 Khangdreda Nongdamba Bala Romi Meitei 2009 Panthungee Wangmada Linthoi Yoimayai Mongsaba 2010 Imagi Laman Singamdre Niti Romi Meitei Kadar Mapee Nungthil Chaibi L. Prakash 21st Century's Kunti Kethabi Joy Soram 2011 Loibataare Ta Raju Molly Pilu H. Luhongbagi Ahing Purnima Bijgupta Laishram Yaiskulgee Pakhang Angaoba Majaru Homen D'
Revised:  Notes 2006Tellanga MameiBimol's sisterOken AmakchamChild Artist, Debut film 2008 Khangdreda Nongdamba Bala Romi Meitei 2009 Panthungee Wangmada Linthoi Yoimayai Mongsaba 2010 Imagi Laman Singamdre Niti Romi Meitei Kadarmapee Nungthil Chaibi L. Prakash 21st Century's Kunti Kethabi Joy Soram 2011 Loibataare Ta Raju Molly Pilu H. Luhongbagi Ahing Purnima Bijgupta Laishram Yaiskulgee Pakhang Angaoba Majaru Homen D'
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Original: He was appointed Commander-in-Chief at  the Jamaica Station  ,Cundall, p. xx and sailed from England in July 1808 aboard , commanded by Captain William Pryce Cumby.
Revised: He was appointed Commander-in-Chief at the Jamaica Station in 1808 ,Cundall, p. xx and sailed from England in July 1808 aboard , commanded by Captain William Pryce Cumby.
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Original: Luanze (Ruhanje) Photo of ruin at Luanze There is a plinth commemorating the site of the church ruin.
Revised: Luanze (Ruhanje) There is a plinth commemorating the site of the church ruin.
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Original: Portuguese ruins in Zimbabwe are scattered across the Northern part of Zimbabwe.
Revised: Portuguese ruins in Zimbabwe are scattered across the northern parts of Zimbabwe.
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Original:  They were left by the Portuguese who were present in Zimbabwe as early as 1560  nearly 300 years before David Livingstone arrived at the Victoria Falls.
Revised:  They were left by the Portuguese who were present in Zimbabwe as early as 1560 , nearly 300 years before David Livingstone arrived at the Victoria Falls.
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Original:  The most famous of these  was the missionary Gonçalo da Silveira.
Revised:  The most famous of these early settlers was the missionary Gonçalo da Silveira.
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Original:  Witnessed by Joao Lobo Priest at Luanze. pp436History and Ethnography of Africa South of the Zambesi, from the Settlement of the Portuguese at Sofala in September 1505 Vol 1 2010 by George McCall Theal 1629 Monomotapa formally surrenders to the Portuguese after Monomotapa forces attack but fail to overcome Masapa and Luanze.
Revised:  Witnessed by João Lobo Priest at Luanze. pp436History and Ethnography of Africa South of the Zambesi, from the Settlement of the Portuguese at Sofala in September 1505 Vol 1 2010 by George McCall Theal 1629 Monomotapa formally surrenders to the Portuguese after Monomotapa forces attack but fail to overcome Masapa and Luanze.
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Original:  Surrender witnessed by Goncalo Ribeiro Priest at Masapa. pp459
Revised:  Surrender witnessed by Gonçalo Ribeiro Priest at Masapa. pp459
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Original: The land was originally seized by Goncalo Joao . pp103 There was an ivory statue of the Virgin Mary found here dating from 17th or 18th century.
Revised: The land was originally seized by Gonçalo João . pp103 There was an ivory statue of the Virgin Mary found here dating from 17th or 18th century.
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Original: Photos taken by cdunbar The settlements or Feiras typically had a Captain, a Priest and a small permanent community living in several brick built fortified houses surrounded by earth walls and ditches. pp197 A history of Mozambique 1994 by Malyn Newitt
Revised: Photos taken by cdunbar The settlements or feiras typically had a Captain, a Priest and a small permanent community living in several brick built fortified houses surrounded by earth walls and ditches. pp197 A history of Mozambique 1994 by Malyn Newitt
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Original:  The Standard Newspaper article January 2012 Peter Garlake excavated 3 of these sites – Dambarare, Masapa and Luanze.
Revised:  Peter Garlake excavated 3 of these sites – Dambarare, Masapa and Luanze.
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Original:  National Museums and Monuments of Zimbabwe The locations are documented in Google Earth photos.
Revised:  The locations are documented in Google Earth photos.
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