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Original:  She is also accused of rigging the admissions process at Ewha Womans University to help her daughter get accepted at the university.
Revised:  She is also accused of rigging the admissions process at Ewha Womens University to help her daughter get accepted at the university.
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Original:  On October 25, 2016, Park Geun-hye publicly acknowledged her close ties with Choi.
Revised:  On October 25, 2016, Park publicly acknowledged her close ties with Choi.
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Original:  2016 On 1 November, Reuters reported a man used an excavator to crash into the front entrance of the Supreme Prosecutors' Office building during a protest in Seoul.
Revised:  2016 On 1 November, a man used an excavator to crash into the front entrance of the Supreme Prosecutors' Office building during a protest in Seoul.
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Original:  On 12 November, four officers were injured during the demonstrations , according to South Korea's Yonhap News Agency, which cited police .
Revised:  On 12 November, four officers were injured during the demonstrations .
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Original: Twenty-six protesters were taken to hospital with injuries and a further 29 were treated at the scene of the protests , Yonhap quoted the Fire Department as saying .
Revised: Twenty-six protesters were taken to hospital with injuries and a further 29 were treated at the scene of the protests .
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Original:  Not all Koreans were calling for the president to resign, however.
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Original:  A short drive away from the main protest, a group of conservative  protesters gathered outside Seoul station in defense of the president until 17 December.
Revised:  A short drive away from the protest, a group of conservative protesters gathered outside Seoul station in defense of the president until 17 December.
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Original:  On 3 December 2.3 million people hit the streets in a nationwide anti-president rally, which is the largest in the country's history.
Revised:  On 3 December 2.3 million people hit the streets in a further anti-Park rally, one of the largest in the country's history.
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Original:  On 10 December,  hundreds of thousands gathered for weekly protests cheering for the impeachment of Park Geun-hye . But, on 17 December, pro-Park supporters held their first major demonstrations in Seoul, claiming about 1 millionaccording to the organizers .
Revised:  On 10 December, hundreds of thousands gathered for weekly protests cheering for the impeachment of Park Geun-hye . But, on 17 December, pro-Park supporters held their first major demonstrations in Seoul, with organizers claiming an attendance of one million .
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Original:  On 24 December, 550,000 people held the Christmas Santa Rally, calling for the immediate removal of their president . 2017 January [[File:20170107 Demo (4).jpg|Candlelight protest against President Park Geun-hye in Seoul, 7 January 2017]] On the first Saturday in 2017 (7 January ) , hundreds of thousands of protestors returned to the streets of Seoul demanding impeached President's immediate removal and the salvaging of a sunken ferry which left more than 300 dead.
Revised:  On 24 December, 550,000 people held the Christmas Santa Rally, calling for the Park's immediate removal . 2017 January [[File:20170107 Demo (4).jpg|Candlelight protest against President Park Geun-hye in Seoul, 7 January 2017]] On the first Saturday in 2017 (7 January ) , hundreds of thousands of protestors returned to the streets of Seoul demanding impeached President's immediate removal and the salvaging of a sunken ferry which left more than 300 dead.
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Original:  On 24 December, 550,000 people held the Christmas Santa Rally, calling for the immediate removal of their president . 2017 January [[File:20170107 Demo (4).jpg|Candlelight protest against President Park Geun-hye in Seoul, 7 January 2017]] On the first Saturday in 2017 (7 January ) , hundreds of thousands of protestors returned to the streets of Seoul demanding impeached President's immediate removal and the salvaging of a sunken ferry which left more than 300 dead.
Revised:  On 24 December, 550,000 people held the Christmas Santa Rally, calling for the immediate removal of their president . 2017 January [[File:20170107 Demo (4).jpg|Candlelight protest against President Park Geun-hye in Seoul, 7 January 2017]] On January 7 , hundreds of thousands of protestors returned to the streets of Seoul demanding impeached President's immediate removal and the salvaging of a sunken ferry which left more than 300 dead.
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Original:  At 7 pm (10:00 GMT) hundreds of yellow balloons were released and the protestors blew out the candles they were carrying as a symbolic gesture asking that Park clarify the mystery surrounding her seven-hour absence at the time of the ferry sinking as people prepared to mark 1000th day anniversary of the Sewol ferry sinking .
Revised:  At 7 pm (10:00 GMT) hundreds of yellow balloons were released and the protestors blew out the candles they were carrying as a symbolic gesture asking that Park clarify the mystery surrounding her seven-hour absence at the time of the ferry sinking .
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Original:  Braving snow and cold, hundreds of thousands of protesters also demanded the Constitutional Court speed up reviewing President Park's impeachment.
Revised:  Braving snow and cold, hundreds of thousands of protesters also demanded the Constitutional Court expedite review of Park's impeachment.
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Original:  February As the Candlelight rallies reached 100th day, on 4 February, 400,000 people gathered at Gwanghwamun Square in Seoul, calling for an extension of the Special Prosecutor’s investigation and for Park to step down immediately.
Revised:  February As the Candlelight rallies reached 100th day, on 4 February, 400,000 people gathered at Gwanghwamun Plaza in Seoul, calling for an extension of the Special Prosecutor’s investigation and for Park to step down immediately.
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Original:  The Impeachment process was pending in Constitutional Court of Korea and could take 180 days to decide the legality of Impeachment . Against Park Geun-hye 's opponents trying to oust her, the protesters have organized increasingly large rallies mostly in central Seoul since October 2016, calling for the reinstatement of the president.
Revised:  The Impeachment process then moved to the Constitutional Court of Korea and could take 180 days to decide the legality of Impeachment . Against Park Geun-hye 's opponents trying to oust her, the protesters have organized increasingly large rallies mostly in central Seoul since October 2016, calling for the reinstatement of the president.
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Original:  The Impeachment process was pending in Constitutional Court of Korea and could take 180 days to decide the legality of Impeachment . Against Park Geun-hye 's opponents trying to oust her, the protesters have organized increasingly large rallies mostly in central Seoul since October 2016, calling for the reinstatement of the president.
Revised:  The Impeachment process was pending in Constitutional Court of Korea which could take 180 days to decide the legality of Impeachment . Against Park Geun-hye 's opponents trying to oust her, the protesters have organized increasingly large rallies mostly in central Seoul since October 2016, calling for the reinstatement of the president.
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Original:  The Impeachment process was pending in Constitutional Court of Korea and could take 180 days to decide the legality of Impeachment . Against Park Geun-hye 's opponents trying to oust her, the protesters have organized increasingly large rallies mostly in central Seoul since October 2016, calling for the reinstatement of the president.
Revised:  The Impeachment process was pending in Constitutional Court of Korea and could take 180 days to review the impeachment . Against Park Geun-hye 's opponents trying to oust her, the protesters have organized increasingly large rallies mostly in central Seoul since October 2016, calling for the reinstatement of the president.
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Original:  The Impeachment process was pending in Constitutional Court of Korea and could take 180 days to decide the legality of Impeachment . Against Park Geun-hye 's opponents trying to oust her, the protesters have organized increasingly large rallies mostly in central Seoul since October 2016, calling for the reinstatement of the president.
Revised:  The Impeachment process was pending in Constitutional Court of Korea and could take 180 days to decide the legality of Impeachment . Park Geun-hye 's opponents trying to oust her, the protesters have organized increasingly large rallies mostly in central Seoul since October 2016, calling for the reinstatement of the president.
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Original:  The Impeachment process was pending in Constitutional Court of Korea and could take 180 days to decide the legality of Impeachment . Against Park Geun-hye 's opponents trying to oust her, the protesters have organized increasingly large rallies mostly in central Seoul since October 2016, calling for the reinstatement of the president.
Revised:  The Impeachment process was pending in Constitutional Court of Korea and could take 180 days to decide the legality of Impeachment . Against Park Geun-hye 
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Original:  Park Geun-hye was finally impeached on 10 March 2017.
Revised:  was finally impeached on 10 March 2017.
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Original: The 2016–2017 South Korean protests (The Candlelight Demonstrations), also known as the Candlelight Struggle () or the Candlelight Revolution () , were a series of protests against President Park Geun-hye that occurred throughout South Korea from November 2016 to March 2017.
Revised: The 2016–2017 South Korean protests (The Candlelight Demonstrations), also known as the Candlelight Struggle () , were a series of protests against President Park Geun-hye that occurred throughout South Korea from November 2016 to March 2017.
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Original:  As research continued and the understanding of psychology and psychiatr advanced, it gradually became more understood through the 20th century that experiencing trauma could have a variety of psychological and emotional impacts that were genuinely medical in nature.
Revised:  As research continued and the understanding of psychology and psychiatry advanced, it gradually became more understood through the 20th century that experiencing trauma could have a variety of psychological and emotional impacts that were genuinely medical in nature.
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Original: Operational Stress Injury or OSI is a non-clinical  term referring to a persistent psychological difficulty caused by traumatic experiences or prolonged high stress or fatigue during service as a military member or first responder.
Revised: Operational Stress Injury or OSI is a non-clinical , non-medical term referring to a persistent psychological difficulty caused by traumatic experiences or prolonged high stress or fatigue during service as a military member or first responder.
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Original:  Not a disagnosis itself, operational stress injury was described by the Canadian Forces as a “grouping of diagnoses that are related to injuries that occur as part of operations", most commonly PTSD, major depression, and generalized anxiety.
Revised:  Not a diagnosis itself, operational stress injury was described by the Canadian Forces as a “grouping of diagnoses that are related to injuries that occur as part of operations", most commonly PTSD, major depression, and generalized anxiety.
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Original:  The same psychiatric conditions are the subject of condiderable study and public policy discussion among the first responder professions.
Revised:  The same psychiatric conditions are the subject of considerable study and public policy discussion among the first responder professions.
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Original: Treatment approaches The various disorders that are broadly called 'operational stress injuries' each have their own bodies of research into various treatments and therapies.
Revised: Treatment The various disorders that are broadly called 'operational stress injuries' each have their own bodies of research into various treatments and therapies.
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Original: The Åstrand test is a way of measuring VO2max Astrand, P.(1952) Experimental studies of physical working capacity in relation to sex and age.
Revised: The Åstrand test is a way of measuring VO2 max. Astrand, P.(1952) Experimental studies of physical working capacity in relation to sex and age.
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Original:  Munksgaard, Copenhage 
Revised:  Munksgaard, Copenhage Referenc
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Original:  URL By their very nature, transmission artworks engage the public, and respond to radio and broadcast histories and materials.
Revised:  By their very nature, transmission artworks engage the public, and respond to radio and broadcast histories and materials.
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Original:  By the early 1990s, " more than half of the 25 largest asbestos manufacturers in the US, including Amatex, Carey-Canada, Celotex, Eagle-Picher, Forty-Eight Insulations, Manville Corporation, National Gypsum, Standard Insulation, Unarco, and UNR Industries had declared bankruptcy.
Revised:  By the early 1990s, more than half of the 25 largest asbestos manufacturers in the US, including Amatex, Carey-Canada, Celotex, Eagle-Picher, Forty-Eight Insulations, Manville Corporation, National Gypsum, Standard Insulation, Unarco, and UNR Industries had declared bankruptcy.
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Original:   By the early 1990s, more than half of the 25 largest asbestos manufacturers in the US, including Amatex, Carey-Canada, Celotex, Eagle-Picher, Forty-Eight Insulations, Manville Corporation, National Gypsum, Standard Insulation, Unarco, and UNR Industries had declared bankruptcy.
Revised:  " By the early 1990s, more than half of the 25 largest asbestos manufacturers in the US, including Amatex, Carey-Canada, Celotex, Eagle-Picher, Forty-Eight Insulations, Manville Corporation, National Gypsum, Standard Insulation, Unarco, and UNR Industries had declared bankruptcy.
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Original:   The amounts and method of allocating compensation have been the source of many court cases, and government attempts at resolution of existing and future cases.
Revised:  " The amounts and method of allocating compensation have been the source of many court cases, and government attempts at resolution of existing and future cases.
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Original:  " By the early 1990s,  more than half of the 25 largest asbestos manufacturers in the US, including Amatex, Carey-Canada, Celotex, Eagle-Picher, Forty-Eight Insulations, Manville Corporation, National Gypsum, Standard Insulation, Unarco, and UNR Industries had declared bankruptcy.
Revised:  By the early 1990s, more than half of the 25 largest asbestos manufacturers in the US, including Amatex, Carey-Canada, Celotex, Eagle-Picher, Forty-Eight Insulations, Manville Corporation, National Gypsum, Standard Insulation, Unarco, and UNR Industries had declared bankruptcy.
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Original:  " By the early 1990s,  more than half of the 25 largest asbestos manufacturers in the US, including Amatex, Carey-Canada, Celotex, Eagle-Picher, Forty-Eight Insulations, Manville Corporation, National Gypsum, Standard Insulation, Unarco, and UNR Industries had declared bankruptcy.
Revised:  " By the early 1990s, " more than half of the 25 largest asbestos manufacturers in the US, including Amatex, Carey-Canada, Celotex, Eagle-Picher, Forty-Eight Insulations, Manville Corporation, National Gypsum, Standard Insulation, Unarco, and UNR Industries had declared bankruptcy.
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Original:  His Nahuatl names () mean "Runs Swiftly with a Shield" and "Rising Eagle", respectively .
Revised:  His Nahuatl names () mean "Runs Swiftly with a Shield" and "Rising Eagle", respectively 
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Original:  Chimalpahin claimed descent from the lords of Tenango-Amecameca-Chalco.
Revised:  , and he claimed descent from the lords of Tenango-Amecameca-Chalco.
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Original:  Chimalpahin recorded the 1610 and 1614 visits of Japanese delegations to Mexico ( led by Tanaka Shōsuke and Hasekura Tsunenaga, respectively ) . He also wrote Diferentes historias originales (also known as Relaciones originales) .
Revised:  Chimalpahin recorded the 1610 and 1614 visits of Japanese delegations to Mexico , led by Tanaka Shōsuke and Hasekura Tsunenaga, respectively ) . He also wrote Diferentes historias originales (also known as Relaciones originales) .
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Original:  Chimalpahin recorded the 1610 and 1614 visits of Japanese delegations to Mexico ( led by Tanaka Shōsuke and Hasekura Tsunenaga, respectively ) . He also wrote Diferentes historias originales (also known as Relaciones originales) .
Revised:  Chimalpahin recorded the 1610 and 1614 visits of Japanese delegations to Mexico ( led by Tanaka Shōsuke and Hasekura Tsunenaga, respectively . He also wrote Diferentes historias originales (also known as Relaciones originales) .
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Original:  He married twice, with Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco and Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez (or Bohórques), widow of Pedro Núñez  Cabrera.
Revised:  He married twice, with Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco and Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez (or Bohórques), widow of Pedro Núñez de Cabrera.
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Original:  He married twice, with Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco and Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez (or Bohórques), widow of Pedro Núñez de Cabrera.
Revised:  He married twice, with Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco and Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez (or Bohórques), widow of Pedro Núñez Cabrera.
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Original: Miguel Holguín y Figueroa, also written as Miguel Holguín de Figueroa, (1516, Cáceres, Castile - > 1576, Tunja, New Kingdom of Granada) was a Spanish conquistador.
Revised: Miguel Holguín y Figueroa, also written as Miguel Holguín de Figueroa, (1516, Cáceres, Castile - after 1576, Tunja, New Kingdom of Granada) was a Spanish conquistador.
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Original:  Miguel Holguín de Figueroa - Geni Miguel Holguín de FigueroaRodríguez Freyle, 1979 ( 1638 ) , p.153 With Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco he had two daughters;
Revised:  Miguel Holguín de Figueroa - Geni Miguel Holguín de FigueroaRodríguez Freyle, 1638 ) , p.153 With Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco he had two daughters;
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Original:  Miguel Holguín de Figueroa - Geni Miguel Holguín de FigueroaRodríguez Freyle, 1979 ( 1638 ) , p.153 With Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco he had two daughters;
Revised:  Miguel Holguín de Figueroa - Geni Miguel Holguín de FigueroaRodríguez Freyle, 1979 ( 1638 , p.153 With Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco he had two daughters;
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Original:  He took part in the expeditions of the conquest of the Chitarero, Motilon, U'wa and Lache  led by Nikolaus Federmann.
Revised:  He took part in the expeditions of conquest of the Chitarero, Motilon, U'wa and Lache led by Nikolaus Federmann.
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Original:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the bad deeds of Hernán Pérez de Quesada who governed Bogotá after the foundation and initial rule by his elder brother Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada . Juan Rodríguez Freyle wrote about Miguel Holguín de Figueroa in his work El Carnero.
Revised:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the rapacious activities of Hernán Pérez de Quesada who governed Bogotá after the foundation and initial rule by his elder brother Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada . Juan Rodríguez Freyle wrote about Miguel Holguín de Figueroa in his work El Carnero.
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Original:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the bad deeds of Hernán Pérez de Quesada who governed Bogotá after the foundation and initial rule by his elder brother Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada . Juan Rodríguez Freyle wrote about Miguel Holguín de Figueroa in his work El Carnero.
Revised:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the bad deeds of Hernán Pérez de Quesada , governor of Bogotá after the foundation and initial rule by his elder brother Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada . Juan Rodríguez Freyle wrote about Miguel Holguín de Figueroa in his work El Carnero.
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Original:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the bad deeds of Hernán Pérez de Quesada who governed Bogotá after the foundation and initial rule by his elder brother Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada . Juan Rodríguez Freyle wrote about Miguel Holguín de Figueroa in his work El Carnero.
Revised:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the bad deeds of Hernán Pérez de Quesada who governed Bogotá . Juan Rodríguez Freyle wrote about Miguel Holguín de Figueroa in his work El Carnero.
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Original:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the bad deeds of Hernán Pérez de Quesada who governed Bogotá after the foundation and initial rule by his elder brother Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada . Juan Rodríguez Freyle wrote about Miguel Holguín de Figueroa in his work El Carnero.
Revised:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the bad deeds of Hernán Pérez de Quesada who governed Bogotá after the foundation and initial rule by his elder brother Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada . Miguel Holguín de Figueroa in his work El Carnero.
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Original:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the bad deeds of Hernán Pérez de Quesada who governed Bogotá after the foundation and initial rule by his elder brother Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada . Juan Rodríguez Freyle wrote about Miguel Holguín de Figueroa in his work El Carnero.
Revised:  List of conquistadors led by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada - Banco de la República Holguín y Figueroa later settled in Tunja, where he protested the bad deeds of Hernán Pérez de Quesada who governed Bogotá after the foundation and initial rule by his elder brother Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada . Juan Rodríguez Freyle wrote about Miguel Holguín y Figueroa was chronicled by Juan Rodríguez Freyle in El Carnero.
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Original:  He married twice , with Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco  and Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez (or Bohórques), widow of Pedro Núñez Cabrera.
Revised:  He married twice : to Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco and Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez (or Bohórques), widow of Pedro Núñez Cabrera.
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Original:  He married twice , with Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco  and Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez (or Bohórques), widow of Pedro Núñez Cabrera.
Revised:  He married twice , with Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco ; and Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez (or Bohórques), widow of Pedro Núñez Cabrera.
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Original:  Miguel Holguín de Figueroa - Geni Miguel Holguín de FigueroaRodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.153 With Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco he had two daughters ;
Revised:  Miguel Holguín de Figueroa - Geni Miguel Holguín de FigueroaRodríguez Freyle, 1638, p.153 With Isabel de Cárcamo y Orozco he had two daughters :
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Original:  Inés de Cárcamo and Elvira de Holguín and with Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez a son and a daughter ;
Revised:  Inés de Cárcamo and Elvira de Holguín ; with Isabel Maldonado de Bohórquez a son and a daughter ;
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