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Original: India's first lunar mission  Chandrayaan-1 (meaning 'moon craft' in Sanskrit)  has reached its destined lunar orbit.
Revised: India's first lunar mission , the Chandrayaan-1 (meaning 'moon craft' in Sanskrit) has reached its destined lunar orbit.
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Original: India's first lunar mission  Chandrayaan-1 (meaning 'moon craft' in Sanskrit)  has reached its destined lunar orbit.
Revised: India's first lunar mission Chandrayaan-1 (meaning 'moon craft' in Sanskrit) , has reached its destined lunar orbit.
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Original:  Diagram of the Chandrayaan-1 orbiter The satellite's on board engine was fired for 58 seconds on Wednesday at about 6.30 pm.
Revised:  Diagram of the Chandrayaan-1 orbiter The satellite's on-board engine was fired for 58 seconds on Wednesday at about 6.30 pm.
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Original:  According to ISRO officials, a Moon Impact Probe , having Indian flag painted on it, will be dropped at late night on November 14th.
Revised:  According to Indian Space Research Organisation (ISRO) officials, the Moon Impact Probe , having Indian flag painted on it, will be dropped at late night on November 14th.
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Original:  It is  29 kg in weight and will take 20 minutes to reach  moon's surface.
Revised:  It is 29 kg and it will it take 20 minutes to reach moon's surface.
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Original:  It is  29 kg in weight and will take 20 minutes to reach  moon's surface.
Revised:  It is 29 kg in weight and will take 20 minutes to reach the moon's surface.
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Original:  It will film the surface during descent.
Revised:  On-board cameras will film the surface during descent.
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Original:  It is now in an almost 102 kilometers from the The Moon.
Revised:  It is now in an almost 102 kilometers from the Moon.
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Original:  It will stay in this orbit for two years and conduct various experiments aimed at gathering information for a better understanding of The Moon.
Revised:  It will stay in this orbit for two years and conduct various experiments aimed at gathering information for a better understanding of the Moon.
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Original:  According to Indian Space Research Organisation (ISRO) officials, the Moon Impact Probe (MIP), with an Indian flag painted on it, will be dropped at late night on November 14.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The MIP has a mass of 29 kg and it will it take 20 minutes to reach the moon's surface.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The MIP has a mass of 29 kg and it will it take 20 minutes to reach the moon's surface.
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Revised:  moon craft reaches final lunar orb
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Original: Diagram of the Chandrayaan-1 orbiter India's first lunar mission, the Chandrayaan-1 (meaning 'moon craft' in Sanskrit), reached its destined lunar orbit on Wednesday.
Revised:  India's first lunar mission, the Chandrayaan-1 (meaning 'moon craft' in Sanskrit), reached its destined lunar orbit on Wednesday.
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Original:  The Moon Impact Probe (MIP), with an Indian flag painted on it, will be dropped late tonight.
Revised:  According to Indian Space Research Organisation (ISRO) officials, the Moon Impact Probe (MIP), with an Indian flag painted on it, will be dropped late tonight.
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Original:  Diagram of the Chandrayaan-1 orbiter It is now in a circular orbit 102 kilometres from the Moon.
Revised:  It is now in a circular orbit 102 kilometres from the Moon.
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Original: Initially he was sentenced to 7 years  700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years  1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
Revised: Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
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Original: Initially he was sentenced to 7 years  700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years  1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
Revised: Initially he was sentenced to 7 years 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
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Original:  A human rights lawyer said that he was given the first 70 lashes last week  he will get 70 more this week.
Revised:  A human rights lawyer said that he was given the first 70 lashes last week and he will get 70 more this week.
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Original:  Family members, friends  colleagues gathered in outrage and in grief outside the headquarter of Egypt's doctors union  requested King Abdullah to pardo Raouf.
Revised:  Family members, friends and colleagues gathered in outrage and in grief outside the headquarter of Egypt's doctors union requested King Abdullah to pardo Raouf.
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Original:  Family members, friends  colleagues gathered in outrage and in grief outside the headquarter of Egypt's doctors union  requested King Abdullah to pardo Raouf.
Revised:  Family members, friends colleagues gathered in outrage and in grief outside the headquarter of Egypt's doctors union and requested King Abdullah to pardo Raouf.
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Original:  The Egyptian Organization for Human Rights (EOHR)  the foreign minister are working hard to find a way to return Raouf home quickly.
Revised:  The Egyptian Organization for Human Rights (EOHR) and the foreign minister are working hard to find a way to return Raouf home quickly.
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Original:  Hafez Abu Saeda, the director of EOHR, stated To AP that the princess was prescribed the same medication as the woman was receiving in the United States, "so it is obvious that the doctor was not at fault for her addiction," Abu Saeda concluded.
Revised:  Hafez Abu Saeda, the director of EOHR, stated that the princess was prescribed the same medication as the woman was receiving in the United States, "so it is obvious that the doctor was not at fault for her addiction," Abu Saeda concluded.
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Original:  Abu Saeda was astonished that the judge doubled the sentence  the lashes after the appeal.
Revised:  Abu Saeda was astonished that the judge doubled the sentence and the lashes after the appeal.
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Original: Family members, friends and colleagues gathered in outrage and in grief outside the headquarter of Egypt's doctors union and requested King Abdullah to pardo Raouf.
Revised: Family members, friends and colleagues gathered in outrage and in grief outside the headquarter of Egypt's doctors union and requested King Abdullah to pardon Raouf.
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Original:  Hafez Abu Saeda, the director of EOHR, stated that the princess was prescribed the same medication as the woman was receiving in the United States, "so it is obvious that the doctor was not at fault for her addiction , " Abu Saeda concluded.
Revised:  Hafez Abu Saeda, the director of EOHR, stated that the princess was prescribed the same medication as the woman was receiving in the United States, "so it is obvious that the doctor was not at fault for her addiction . " Abu Saeda concluded.
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Original:  Hafez Abu Saeda, the director of EOHR, stated that the princess was prescribed the same medication as the woman was receiving in the United States, "so it is obvious that the doctor was not at fault for her addiction , " Abu Saeda concluded.
Revised:  Hafez Abu Saeda, the director of EOHR, stated that the princess was prescribed the same medication as the woman was receiving in the United States, "so it is obvious that the doctor was not at fault for her addiction , " 
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Original: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction . "  Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
Revised: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction . " Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
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Original: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction . "  Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
Revised: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction " Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
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Original: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction . "  Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
Revised: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction . " , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers. Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
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Original: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction . "  Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
Revised: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction . " Initially sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
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Original: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction . "  Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes but after he appealed he was sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
Revised: Raouf Amin el-Araby, a 52-year-old Egyptian doctor who has been serving the Saudi Royal family for 20 years, was convicted of malpractice , reportedly after treating a Saudi princess with painkillers . Egyptian newspapers reported that he was accused of driving a Saudi princess "to addiction . " Initially he was sentenced to 7 years and 700 lashes , he has been sentenced to 15 years and 1500 lashes, 70 lashes once a week.
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Original:  Family members, friends and colleagues gathered in outrage and in grief outside the headquarters of Egypt's doctors union and requested King Abdullah to pardon Raouf.
Revised:  Family members, friends and colleagues gathered in outrage and grief outside the headquarters of Egypt's doctors union and requested King Abdullah to pardon Raouf.
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Original:  Family members, friends and colleagues gathered in outrage and in grief outside the headquarters of Egypt's doctors union and requested King Abdullah to pardon Raouf.
Revised:  Family members, friends and colleagues gathered in outrage and in grief outside the headquarters of Egypt's doctors union , calling upon King Abdullah to pardon Raouf.
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Original:  Hafez Abu Saeda, the director of EOHR, stated that the princess was prescribed the same medication as the woman was receiving in the United States, "so it is obvious that the doctor was not at fault for her addiction."
Revised:  Hafez Abu Saeda, the director of EOHR, stated that the princess was prescribed the same medication that she was receiving in the United States, "so it is obvious that the doctor was not at fault for her addiction."
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Original:  Protests in Egypt have driven the Egyptian foreign ministry to seek a solution, partly out of concern that negative repercussions may damage relations between Cairo and Riyadh  
Revised:  Protests in Egypt have driven the Egyptian foreign ministry to seek a solution, partly out of concern that negative repercussions may damage relations between Cairo and Riyadh . 
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Original:  He also apologized to the 15,472 paid attendance at the MCI Center "whom had roared his name when he entered the ring less than an hour earlier," according to the Borges.
Revised:  He also apologized to the 15,472 paid attendance at the MCI Center "whom had roared his name when he entered the ring less than an hour earlier," according to Borges.
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Original: The disgraced former champ also told reporters he is "going to look into my missionary work," according to Reuters.
Revised: The disgraced former champion also told reporters he is "going to look into my missionary work," according to Reuters.
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Original:  When an attempt to break his opponents arm failed to end the fight, Tyson landed a head-butt that opended a cut near McBride's left eye.
Revised:  When an attempt to break his opponent's arm failed to end the fight, Tyson landed a head-butt that opended a cut near McBride's left eye.
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Original:  When an attempt to break his opponent's arm failed to end the fight, Tyson landed a head-butt that opended a cut near McBride's left eye.
Revised:  When an attempt to break his opponent's arm failed to end the fight, Tyson landed a head-butt that opened a cut near McBride's left eye.
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Original: Alaskan Democrat takes slight lead in US Senate race Image:Mark Begich at Fairbanks Labor Day Picnic 2008.jpg|Begich is the mayor of Anchorage%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% After Friday's counts, Democratic Party candidate Mark Begich increased his small lead over his Republican rival for the US Senate, Ted Stevens, to 1022 votes.
Revised:  Image:Mark Begich at Fairbanks Labor Day Picnic 2008.jpg|Begich is the mayor of Anchorage%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% After Friday's counts, Democratic Party candidate Mark Begich increased his small lead over his Republican rival for the US Senate, Ted Stevens, to 1022 votes.
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Original: Alaskan Democrat takes slight lead in US Senate race Image:Mark Begich at Fairbanks Labor Day Picnic 2008.jpg|Begich is the mayor of Anchorage%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% After Friday's counts, Democratic Party candidate Mark Begich increased his small lead over his Republican rival for the US Senate, Ted Stevens, to 1022 votes.
Revised: Alaskan Democrat takes slight lead in US Senate race %DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% After Friday's counts, Democratic Party candidate Mark Begich increased his small lead over his Republican rival for the US Senate, Ted Stevens, to 1022 votes.
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Original:  Three weeks ago, incumbent Stevens was found guilty of failing to disclose gifts, and so could be the first convicted felon elected to the Senate.
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Original: At 8.34 pm Indian time tonight (1504 UTC), India became the fourth country to land its flag on the moon.
Revised: At 8.34 pm Indian time tonight (1504 UTC), India became the fourth group to land its flag on the moon.
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Original:  With this landing, India became both the fourth entity to place a flag on the moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the moon.
Revised:  With this landing, India became both the fourth group to place a flag on the moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the moon.
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Original: At 8.34 pm Indian time tonight (1504 UTC), India became the fourth group to land its flag on the moon.
Revised: At 8:34 pm Indian time tonight (1504 UTC), India became the fourth group to land its flag on the moon.
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Original:  The unmanned lunar orbiter Chandrayaan-1 ejected its Moon Impact Probe, which hurtled across the surface of the moon at 1.5 kilometres per second (3000 miles per hour), and successfully crash landed near the Moon's south pole.
Revised:  The unmanned lunar orbiter Chandrayaan-1 ejected its Moon Impact Probe, which hurtled across the surface of the Moon at 1.5 kilometres per second (3000 miles per hour), and successfully crash landed near the Moon's south pole.
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Original:  India's tricolour is marked on all sides of the Moon Impact Probe Chandrayaan-1 (meaning ' moon craft' in Sanskrit) reached its target lunar orbit on Wednesday.
Revised:  India's tricolour is marked on all sides of the Moon Impact Probe Chandrayaan-1 (meaning ' Moon craft' in Sanskrit) reached its target lunar orbit on Wednesday.
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Original:  With this landing, India became both the fourth group to place a flag on the moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the moon .
Revised:  With this landing, India became both the fourth group to place a flag on the Moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the moon .
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Original:  With this landing, India became both the fourth group to place a flag on the moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the moon .
Revised:  With this landing, India became both the fourth group to place a flag on the moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the Moon .
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Original:  Although Japan and China currently each have scientific satellites orbiting the moon , they have yet to land their flags on the surface.
Revised:  Although Japan and China currently each have scientific satellites orbiting the Moon , they have yet to land their flags on the surface.
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Original:  After the orbiter ejected it, the probe took about 25 minutes to reach the moon 's surface.
Revised:  After the orbiter ejected it, the probe took about 25 minutes to reach the Moon 's surface.
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Original:  Although Japan and China currently each have scientific satellites orbiting the Moon, they have yet to land their flags on the surface.
Revised:  Japan and China currently each have scientific satellites orbiting the Moon, they have yet to land their flags on the surface.
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Original:  Although Japan and China currently each have scientific satellites orbiting the Moon, they have yet to land their flags on the surface.
Revised:  Although Japan and China currently each have scientific satellites orbiting the Moon, though China has not yet put a spacecraft on the moon's surface.
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Original: With this landing, India became both the fourth group to place a flag on the Moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the Moon.
Revised: With this landing, India became both the fourth country to place a flag on the Moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the Moon.
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Original: With this landing, India became both the fourth group to place a flag on the Moon and the fifth country to send a spacecraft to the Moon.
Revised: With this landing, India became both the fourth group to place a flag on the Moon and the fifth group to send a spacecraft to the Moon.
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Original: At 8:34 pm Indian time Friday night (1504 UTC), India became the fourth group to land its flag on the Moon.
Revised: At 8:34 pm Indian time Friday night (1504 UTC), India became the fourth country to land its flag on the Moon.
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Original:  The cost of this mission is estimated at  3.4 billion  rupees (US$78 million).
Revised:  The cost of this mission is estimated at 3.4 billion ) rupees (US$78 million).
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Original:  This is the case as the Eurozones economy also shrunk by 0.2\% in the second quarter of this year   
Revised:  This is the case as the Eurozones economy also shrunk by 0.2\% in the second quarter of this year . 
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Original:  This is the case as the Eurozones economy also shrunk by 0.2\% in the second quarter of this year.
Revised:  This is the case as the Eurozone's economy also shrunk by 0.2\% in the second quarter of this year.
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Original:  "Not only did the third quarter contraction in GDP confirm that the eurozone is now in recession, but latest data and survey evidence indicate that the fourth quarter is likely to see a sharper fall in GDP as the financial crisis bites harder," he stated.
Revised:  "Not only did the third quarter contraction in GDP confirm that the Eurozone is now in recession, but latest data and survey evidence indicate that the fourth quarter is likely to see a sharper fall in GDP as the financial crisis bites harder," he stated.
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Original:  Despite the economy shrinking according to quarter-on-quarter results, year-on-year results for the third quarter of 2008 still show a small growth in the economy, although the growth s less then 0.1\%.
Revised:  Despite the economy shrinking according to quarter-on-quarter results, year-on-year results for the third quarter of 2008 still show a small growth in the economy, although the growth is less then 0.1\%.
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Original:  This is the case as the Eurozone's economy  also shrunk by 0.2\% in the second quarter of this year.
Revised:  This is the case as the Eurozone's economy , which also shrunk by 0.2\% in the second quarter of this year.
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Original:  Nokia also stated that it's "preliminary estimate is that the industry mobile device volumes will be down in 2009 compared to 2008, impacted by the continuing overall economic slowdown.   
Revised:  Nokia also stated that it's "preliminary estimate is that the industry mobile device volumes will be down in 2009 compared to 2008, impacted by the continuing overall economic slowdown. " 
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Original:  It has since fallen to a low of $12.22, although it has now recovered  
Revised:  It has since fallen to a low of $12.22, although it has now recovered . 
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Original: Nokias share price has fallen on the announcement of this news.
Revised: Nokia's share price has fallen on the announcement of this news.
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Original:  All nine on board, including Interior Minister Juan Camilo Mourino, and five on the ground were killed   
Revised:  All nine on board, including Interior Minister Juan Camilo Mourino, and five on the ground were killed . 
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