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Original:  This is nothing but a plot to engulf the whole world in a sea of war flames and rule it by imposing a freedom based on power." 
Revised:  This is nothing but a plot to engulf the whole world in a sea of war flames and rule it by imposing a freedom based on power." Technical experts and politicians have advised though that this announcement might still need to be taken with suspicion, however, as North Korea has made large announcements before making large demands many times in the past as a form of bluffing. Because they have never shown any outside experts concrete proof of their having successfully extracted the plutonium from their reactors, nor that they have managed to perform the complicated chemistry and engineering necessary to develop a prototype nuclear weapon design, and have not performed the requisite first nuclear test, their nuclear status, though declared, is being viewed as somewhat ambiguous. It is also unknown whether their purported nuclear weapons are sophisticated enough to fit onto their missiles, a complicated task to achieve without testing or outside assistance.
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Original:   Category:Politics and conflicts Category:North Korea Category:Asia Category:Nuclear proliferation Category:Published __NOTOC__ de:Nordkorea besitzt Atomwaffen sv:Nordkorea påstår sig ha utvecklat kärnvapen - avbryter förhandlingar Category:Condoleezza Ri
Revised:  __NOTOC__ Category:Politics and conflicts Category:North Korea Category:Asia Category:Nuclear proliferation Category:Published __NOTOC__ de:Nordkorea besitzt Atomwaffen sv:Nordkorea påstår sig ha utvecklat kärnvapen - avbryter förhandlingar Category:Condoleezza Ri
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Original:   Category:Politics and conflicts Category:North Korea Category:Asia Category:Nuclear proliferation Category:Published __NOTOC__ de:Nordkorea besitzt Atomwaffen sv:Nordkorea påstår sig ha utvecklat kärnvapen - avbryter förhandlingar Category:Condoleezza Ri
Revised:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:North Korea Category:Asia Category:Nuclear proliferation Category:Published __NOTOC__ de:Nordkorea besitzt Atomwaffen sv:Nordkorea påstår sig ha utvecklat kärnvapen - avbryter Category:Condoleezza Ri
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Original:   Category:Politics and conflicts Category:North Korea Category:Asia Category:Nuclear proliferation Category:Published __NOTOC__ de:Nordkorea besitzt Atomwaffen sv:Nordkorea påstår sig ha utvecklat kärnvapen - avbryter förhandlingar Category:Condoleezza Ri
Revised:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:North Korea Category:Asia Category:Nuclear proliferation Category:Published __NOTOC__ de:Nordkorea besitzt Atomwaffen sv:Nordkorea påstår sig ha utvecklat kärnvapen - avbryter förhandlingar förhandling
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Original: This week, the Yonhap news agency reported (via AFP) that South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-Moon was also travelling to Washington, DC, to talk with US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice and other US officials about North Korea's nuclear weapons program.
Revised: This week, the Yonhap news agency reported (via AFP) that South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon was also travelling to Washington, DC, to talk with US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice and other US officials about North Korea's nuclear weapons program.
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Original:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:North Korea Category:Asia Category:Nuclear proliferation Category:Published Category:Condoleezza Rice Category:Ban Ki-Moon Category:Hu Jintao
Revised:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:North Korea Category:Asia Category:Nuclear proliferation Category:Published Category:Condoleezza Rice Category:Ban Ki-moon Category:Hu Jintao
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Original:  Inkscape is currently under active development which is shown by the version number below one, new features were being added regularly.
Revised:  Inkscape is currently under active development which is indicated by the version number below one, new features were being added regularly.
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Original:  Also happening immediately, Craig Mundie, Chief Technical Officer, will become cheif research and strategy officer   
Revised:  Also happening immediately, Craig Mundie, Chief Technical Officer, will become cheif research and strategy officer . 
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Original: Bill Gates will step down from his daily roles at Microsoft by July 2008.
Revised: Bill Gates will step down from his daily roles at Microsoft by July 2008, but he is not leaving the company. He will still be chairman although he will not have to go every day.
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Original:  Ray Ozzie developed Lotus Notes and came to Microsoft when it acquired his company, Groove Networks Inc., in 2005, Also happening immediately, Craig Mundie, Chief Technical Officer, will become chief research and strategy officer.
Revised:  Also happening immediately, Craig Mundie, Chief Technical Officer, will become chief research and strategy officer.
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Original:  Paraguay never did this.
Revised:  Rarely did Paraguay do this.
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Original:  Sweden's captain and centre-back Olof Mellberg had a strong game and may be the reason only 3 of their long shots forced Andreas Isaksson to save.
Revised:  Sweden's captain and centre-back Olof Mellberg had a strong game and may be the reason only 3 of Paraguay's long shots forced Andreas Isaksson to save.
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Original:  Sweden's captain and centre-back Olof Mellberg had a strong game and may be the reason only 3 of Paraguay's long shots forced Andreas Isaksson to save .
Revised:  Sweden's captain and centre-back Olof Mellberg had a strong game and may be the reason Andreas Isaksson had only three saves .
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Original:  Unfortunately for Sweden the thing that hit the netting was Paraguay's Denis Caniza;
Revised:  Unfortunately for Sweden the thing that hit the net was Paraguay's Denis Caniza;
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Original:  The striker combined well with Freddie Lungjberg .
Revised:  The striker combined well with Freddie Ljungberg .
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Original:  Dominican baseball player Albert Pujols put his first home run after his contract agreement with the Los Angeles Angels of Anaheim ;
Revised:  Dominican baseball player Albert Pujols earned his first home run after his contract agreement with the Los Angeles Angels of Anaheim ;
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Original:  Dominican baseball player Albert Pujols put his first home run after his contract agreement with the Los Angeles Angels of Anaheim ;
Revised:  Dominican baseball player Albert Pujols put his first home run after joining the Los Angeles Angels of Anaheim ;
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Original:  besides being his big leagues 446th  home run, this is the first regular-season longball after 33 games and 139 plate appearances, incluiding his last St. Louis Cardinals at-bats.
Revised:  besides being his big leagues 446th home run, this is the first regular-season long ball after 33 games and 139 plate appearances, incluiding his last St. Louis Cardinals at-bats.
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Original:  besides being his big leagues 446th  home run, this is the first regular-season longball after 33 games and 139 plate appearances, incluiding his last St. Louis Cardinals at-bats.
Revised:  besides being his big leagues 446th home run, this is the first regular-season longball after 33 games and 139 plate appearances, including his last St. Louis Cardinals at-bats.
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Original:  At the time of the end of this game, the Dominican first baseman (apart of his 446 homeruns) have a career with 1,336 runs batted in and a .326 batting average
Revised:  The Dominican first baseman (apart of his 446 homeruns) have a career with 1,336 runs batted in and a .326 batting average
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Original:  At the time of the end of this game, the Dominican first baseman (apart of his 446 homeruns) have a career with 1,336 runs batted in and a .326 batting average
Revised:  At the time of the end of this game, the Dominican first baseman now has a career 1,336 runs batted in and a .326 batting average
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Original:  Previously, Pujols had played for St. Louis for 11 seasons   
Revised:  Previously, Pujols had played for St. Louis for 11 seasons . 
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Original:  Pujols snapped back at Anaheim and capped a 4-3 home-team win against the Toronto Blue Jays at the Angel Stadium of Anaheim .
Revised:  Pujols snapped back at Anaheim and capped a 4-3 home-team win against the at the .
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Original:  A bill proposed later in the sitting day by the Australian Greens to stop the Governor-General disallowing ACT state law establishing civil unions failed, by a majority of two votes  
Revised:  A bill proposed later in the sitting day by the Australian Greens to stop the Governor-General disallowing ACT state law establishing civil unions failed, by a majority of two votes . 
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Original: 200px The Australian Democrats deputy leader, Senator Andrew Bartlett moved in the Australian Senate a bill to amend the Marriage Act to provide for same-sex marriages.
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Original:  The attacker is described as an unshaven Maori male in his late 30s or 40s
Revised:  The attacker is described as an unshaven Māori male in his late 30s or 40s
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Original: A man, who had been drinking, tricked his way into her home at about 9.00 pm, Tuesday, June 13.
Revised: A man, who had been drinking, told the victim that he needed to use her phone, she handed him a portable phone through a small gap in the door and then closed the door. The man pretended to use the phone and then when she opened the door again to regain her phone the man barged his way in, at about 9.00 pm, Tuesday, June 13.
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Original: A man, who had been drinking, told the victim that he needed to use her phone, she handed him a portable phone through a small gap in the door and then closed the door.
Revised: A man, who had been drinking, told the victim that he needed to use her phone, she handed him a portable phone through a small opening in the door and then closed the door.
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Original: Image:Nwhi - French Frigate Shoals reef - many fish.jpg|300px|Pennantfish, Pyramid and Milletseed Butterflyfish at Rapture Reef on French Frigate Shoals of the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands U.S. President George W. Bush yesterday signed an executive order declaring the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands a U.S. National Monument , creating the largest protected marine area in the world and the largest single conservation area in the history of the United States.
Revised:  U.S. President George W. Bush yesterday signed an executive order declaring the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands a U.S. National Monument , creating the largest protected marine area in the world and the largest single conservation area in the history of the United States.
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Original: Image:Nwhi - French Frigate Shoals reef - many fish.jpg|300px|Pennantfish, Pyramid and Milletseed Butterflyfish at Rapture Reef on French Frigate Shoals of the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands U.S. President George W. Bush yesterday signed an executive order declaring the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands a U.S. National Monument , creating the largest protected marine area in the world and the largest single conservation area in the history of the United States.
Revised: Image:Nwhi - French Frigate Shoals reef - many fish.jpg|300px|Pennantfish, Pyramid and Milletseed Butterflyfish at Rapture Reef on French Frigate Shoals of the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands U.S. President George W. Bush yesterday signed an executive order declaring the a , creating the largest protected marine area in the world and the largest single conservation area in the history of the United States.
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Original:  In a signing ceremony attended by Hawaii officials, including Hawaii Governor Linda Lingle , Bush pledged, "This region holds the largest and healthiest untouched coral reef system in the United States.
Revised:  In a signing ceremony attended by Hawaii officials, including Hawaii Governor , Bush pledged, "This region holds the largest and healthiest untouched coral reef system in the United States.
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Original:  Bush reportedly moved quickly to protect the archipelago after a screening of Jean-Michel Cousteau 's documentary Voyage to Kure in April.
Revised:  Bush reportedly moved quickly to protect the archipelago after a screening of 's documentary Voyage to Kure in April.
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Original:  Image:Hawaiianislandchain USGS.png| 300px|All the Northwestern islands are uninhabited, except Midway Island As a National Monument, the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands would be subject to one of the highest levels of protection in the U.S. All fishing will be phased out over five years, and visitors will require permits for snorkeling and diving.
Revised:  300px|All the Northwestern islands are uninhabited, except Midway Island As a National Monument, the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands would be subject to one of the highest levels of protection in the U.S. All fishing will be phased out over five years, and visitors will require permits for snorkeling and diving.
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Original:  Image:Hawaiianislandchain USGS.png| 300px|All the Northwestern islands are uninhabited, except Midway Island As a National Monument, the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands would be subject to one of the highest levels of protection in the U.S. All fishing will be phased out over five years, and visitors will require permits for snorkeling and diving.
Revised:  Image:Hawaiianislandchain USGS.png| 300px|All the Northwestern islands are uninhabited, except As a National Monument, the Northwestern Hawaiian Islands would be subject to one of the highest levels of protection in the U.S. All fishing will be phased out over five years, and visitors will require permits for snorkeling and diving.
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Original:  The preserve, covering all the islands northwest of Niihau, covers 140,000 square miles (360,000 km²), covering 10 islands and atolls, and stretches for about 1,400 miles (2,200 km)  
Revised:  The preserve, covering all the islands northwest of Niihau, covers 140,000 square miles (360,000 km²), covering 10 islands and atolls, and stretches for about 1,400 miles (2,200 km) . 
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Original:  "The local community deserves to be told what actually happened at the Lucas Heights reactor last Thursday, and why the release of radioactive gases into the atmosphere was not made public," said Ms Macklin         
Revised:  "The local community deserves to be told what actually happened at the Lucas Heights reactor last Thursday, and why the release of radioactive gases into the atmosphere was not made public," said Ms Macklin . 
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Original: Jenny Macklin (Jagajaga, Labor, shadow minister for education, science and technology and deputy opposition leader accused science minister Julie Bishop (Curtin, Liberal) of misleading parliament.
Revised: Jenny Macklin (Jagajaga, Labor, shadow science minister and deputy leader of the opposition accused science minister Julie Bishop (Curtin, Liberal) of misleading parliament.
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Original:  The incidents come just a week after the Australian government announced an inquiry into the fesability of nuclear power.
Revised:  The incidents come just a week after the Australian government announced an inquiry into the feasibility of nuclear power.
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Original:  The first incident occured on June 8, when a carbon canister containing radioactive material exploded, blowing out seals in a cell at the Lucas Heights site.
Revised:  The first incident occurred on June 8, when a carbon canister containing radioactive material exploded, blowing out seals in a cell at the Lucas Heights site.
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Original:  Jenny Macklin (Jagajaga, Labor  , shadow science minister and deputy leader of the opposition accused science minister Julie Bishop (Curtin, Liberal) of misleading  parliament.
Revised:  Jenny Macklin (Jagajaga, Labor ) , shadow science minister and deputy leader of the opposition accused science minister Julie Bishop (Curtin, Liberal) of misleading parliament.
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Original:  Jenny Macklin (Jagajaga, Labor  , shadow science minister and deputy leader of the opposition accused science minister Julie Bishop (Curtin, Liberal) of misleading  parliament.
Revised:  Jenny Macklin (Jagajaga, Labor , shadow science minister and deputy leader of the opposition accused science minister Julie Bishop (Curtin, Liberal) of misleading the parliament.
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Original:  Ms Bishop told parliament on Wednesday that "there was no measurable contamination found outside the immediate area where the incident occurred," Following Ms Macklin's statement ANSTO said it was was "surprised and disappointed" at Ms Mackin's comments.
Revised:  Ms Bishop told parliament on Wednesday that "there was no measurable contamination found outside the immediate area where the incident occurred," Following Ms Macklin's statement ANSTO said it was "surprised and disappointed" at Ms Mackin's comments.
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Original:  ANSTO said that it could however calculate the amount of radiative material released and it was a "very small fraction of the radiation dose received by everyone each year from naturally occurring sources of radiation".
Revised:  ANSTO said that it could however calculate the amount of radioactive material released and it was a "very small fraction of the radiation dose received by everyone each year from naturally occurring sources of radiation".
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Original:  ANSTO also admitted another two incidents at Lucas Heights on Thursday.
Revised:  ANSTO admitted another two incidents at Lucas Heights on Thursday.
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Original:  ANSTO also admitted another two incidents at Lucas Heights on Thursday.
Revised:  ANSTO also admitted another two incidents occured at its Lucas Heights facility on Thursday.
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Original:  The first occured when a Worker who was cleaning up a production area and burst a package of radioactive material.
Revised:  The first occurred when a Worker who was cleaning up a production area and burst a package of radioactive material.
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Original:  The second occured when a worker packing a radiopharmaceutical dropped a small vial.
Revised:  The second occurred when a worker packing a radiopharmaceutical dropped a small vial.
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Original: ANSTO admitted another two incidents occured at its Lucas Heights facility on Thursday.
Revised: ANSTO admitted another two incidents occurred at its Lucas Heights facility on Thursday.
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Original:  Miami's win over Dallas evens the NBA Finals series to 2-2      .
Revised:  Miami's win over Dallas evens the NBA Finals series to 2-2 . .
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Original:  The sixth and, if necessary, the seventh games will be played in Dallas . Related storie
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Original:  The sixth and, if necessary, the seventh games will be played in Dallas . Related storie
Revised:  The sixth and, if necessary, the seventh games will be played in Dallas . 
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Original: Dwayne Wade had 36 points to led the Miami Heat to a 98-74 victory Thursday night over the Dallas Mavericks.
Revised: Dwayne Wade had 36 points to lead the Miami Heat to a 98-74 victory Thursday night over the Dallas Mavericks.
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Original:  Studdard has sold 2.2 million records, but because of the damage done to his credit by Edwards, it is now even hard for Ruben to buy a home, said Vowel 
Revised:  Studdard has sold 2.2 million records, but because of the damage done to his credit by Edwards, it is now even hard for Ruben to buy a home, said Vowell. 
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Original:  Studdard has sold 2.2 million records, but because of the damage done to his credit by Edwards, it is now even hard for Ruben to buy a home, said Vowell . Category:Music Category:United Stat
Revised:  Studdard has sold 2.2 million records, but because of the damage done to his credit by Edwards, it is now even hard for Ruben to buy a home, said Vowell Category:Music Category:United Stat
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Original:  Studdard has sold 2.2 million records, but because of the damage done to his credit by Edwards, it is now even hard for Ruben to buy a home, said Vowell . Category:Music Category:United Stat
Revised:  Studdard has sold 2.2 million records, but because of the damage done to his credit by Edwards, it is now even hard for Ruben to buy a home, said Vowell . 
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Original: OWNIAN20px| LEGEN 
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Original: The U.S. identified the new Al-Qaeda leader in Iraq as Abu Ayyub al-Masri , an Egyptian with ties to Ayman al-Zawahiri.
Revised: The U.S. identified the new al Qaeda leader in Iraq as Abu Ayyub al-Masri , an Egyptian with ties to Ayman al-Zawahiri.
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Original: The U.S. identified the new Al-Qaeda leader in Iraq as Abu Ayyub al-Masri , an Egyptian with ties to Ayman al-Zawahiri.
Revised: The U.S. identified the new Al-Qaeda leader in Iraq as Abu Ayyub Al-Masri , an Egyptian with ties to Ayman al-Zawahiri.
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Original:  Major General William Caldwell, sposesman for the U.S. military in Iraq, said, "We think that Abu Ayyub al-Masri is in fact, probably, Abu Hamza al-Muhajir.
Revised:  Major General William Caldwell, spokesman for the U.S. military in Iraq, said, "We think that Abu Ayyub al-Masri is in fact, probably, Abu Hamza al-Muhajir.
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Original:  They are probably one and the same.     
Revised:  They are probably one and the same. " 
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Original: Major General William Caldwell, spokesman for the U.S. military in Iraq, said, "We think that Abu Ayyub al-Masri is in fact, probably, Abu Hamza al-Muhajir.
Revised:  "We think that Abu Ayyub al-Masri is in fact, probably, Abu Hamza al-Muhajir.
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Original:  They are probably one and the same . " 
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Original:  Related news Abu Musab al-Zarqawi killed in airstrik
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Original:  Related news Abu Musab al-Zarqawi killed in airstrik
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Original:  On 42 minutes Didier Drogba intercepted a misplaced pass but on the breakaway could not thread his pass to his team mater when 2 on 1 with the last defender.
Revised:  On 42 minutes Didier Drogba intercepted a misplaced pass but on the breakaway could not thread his pass to his team mate when 2 on 1 with the last defender.
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Original:  After half-time the Netherlands focussed more energies on keeping their lead and while the Ivory Coast still looked to pass through them looked capable to hold out for the win.
Revised:  But it was not to be the Ivory Coast's day. While the Ivory Coast still looked to pass through them looked capable to hold out for the win.
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Original:  After half-time the Netherlands focussed more energies on keeping their lead and while the Ivory Coast still looked to pass through them looked capable to hold out for the win.
Revised:  After half-time the Netherlands focussed more energies on keeping their lead and while the Ivory Coast still looked to pass through the Netherlands the Dutch looked more than capable to hold out for the win.
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Original: But it was not to be the Ivory Coast's day.
Revised: But it was not to be Ivory Coast's day.
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Original:  While the Ivory Coast still looked to pass through the Netherlands the Dutch looked more than capable to hold out for the win.
Revised:  While Ivory Coast still looked to pass through the Netherlands the Dutch looked more than capable to hold out for the win.
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