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Original:   Tekrur as a result of his reign expanded into the South as his State sanctioned URL Accessing Gambia - Futa URL African Kingdoms As a result of his jihad and sharia law, the Serer people of Tekrur resisted Islam in favour of the Serer religion and were forced out of the country.
Revised:  He was the first sovereign to officially pronounce the Sharia in the Sudan, establishing Islam in the region for centuries to come, today Islam in the largest religion in the Sudan. In 1035 War Jabi introduced Sharia in the kingdom. This adoption of Islam and Islamic Sharia greatly benefited the state economically and created greater political ties between the Muslim states of North Africa that would also affect them in the coming conflicts between the animist state of Ghana and its northern neighbours.. The domains of Tekrur as a result of his reign expanded into the South as his State sanctioned URL Accessing Gambia - Futa URL African Kingdoms As a result of his jihad and sharia law, the Serer people of Tekrur resisted Islam in favour of the Serer religion and were forced out of the country.
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Original:   Tekrur as a result of his reign expanded into the South as his State sanctioned URL Accessing Gambia - Futa URL African Kingdoms As a result of his jihad and sharia law, the Serer people of Tekrur resisted Islam in favour of the Serer religion and were forced out of the country.
Revised:  Tekrur as a result of his reign expanded into the South as his State URL Accessing Gambia - Futa URL African Kingdoms As a result of his jihad and sharia law, the Serer people of Tekrur resisted Islam in favour of the Serer religion and were forced out of the country.
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Original:  Also referred to as a "Location Vacation".
Revised:  It is also referred to as a "Location Vacation".
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Original:  For instance, touring London in a high-speed boat like James Bond, or visiting the stately homes that are seen in the Jane Austen films are good examples.
Revised:  Touring London in a high-speed boat like James Bond, or visiting the stately homes that are seen in the Jane Austen films are good examples.
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Original:  Ecological studies have often found links between risk-modifying factors and health outcomes well in advance of other epidemiological or laboratory approaches.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Epidemiology Category:Design of experimen
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Original: UV radiation and influenze Another example of the use of temporal ecological studies relates to influenza.
Revised: UV radiation and influenza Another example of the use of temporal ecological studies relates to influenza.
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Original: Notable examples  Cholera study The study by John Snow regarding a cholera outbreak in London is considered the first ecological study to solve a health issue.
Revised: Study Design Generally, three different designs can be used to conduct ecological studies depending on the situation. Such studies may compare populations or groups using a multiple-group design, periods of time using a time-trend design, or groups and time using a mixed design. Cholera study The study by John Snow regarding a cholera outbreak in London is considered the first ecological study to solve a health issue.
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Original: Notable examples  Cholera study The study by John Snow regarding a cholera outbreak in London is considered the first ecological study to solve a health issue.
Revised: Notable examples Notable examples Cholera study The study by John Snow regarding a cholera outbreak in London is considered the first ecological study to solve a health issue.
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Original: Ecological studies are used to understand the relationship between outcome and exposure at a population level, where 'population' represents a group of individuals with a shared characteristic such as geography, ethnicity, socio-economic status of employment.
Revised: In epidemiology, ecological studies are used to understand the relationship between outcome and exposure at a population level, where 'population' represents a group of individuals with a shared characteristic such as geography, ethnicity, socio-economic status of employment.
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Original:  For his efforts to conserve rare and endangered flora and fauna in Hawaii, Tetramolopium sylvae, an endangered species in the family Asteraceae  was named in his honor.
Revised:  For his efforts to conserve rare and endangered flora and fauna in Hawaii, Tetramolopium sylvae, an endangered species in the family Asteraceae , was named in his honor.
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Original:  CT is not used  however, when there is a reason to avoid radiation exposure, e.g. in pregnancy.
Revised:  CT is not used , however, when there is a reason to avoid radiation exposure, e.g. in pregnancy.
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Original:  Thus, some experts recommend obtaining a follow up ultrasound at 4–6 weeks to reduce the false-negative rate of the initial ultrasound.
Revised:  Thus, some experts recommend obtaining a follow-up ultrasound at 4–6 weeks to reduce the false-negative rate of the initial ultrasound.
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Original:  Prognosis The prognosis of hydronephrosis is extremely variable , and depends on the condition leading to hydronephrosis, whether one (unilateral) or both (bilateral) kidneys are affected, the pre-existing kidney function, the duration of hydronephrosis (acute or chronic), and whether hydronephrosis occurred in developing or mature kidneys.
Revised:  Prognosis The prognosis of hydronephrosis is extremely variable and depends on the condition leading to hydronephrosis, whether one (unilateral) or both (bilateral) kidneys are affected, the pre-existing kidney function, the duration of hydronephrosis (acute or chronic), and whether hydronephrosis occurred in developing or mature kidneys.
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Original: Syed Ameer ud din Kidwai (1901 at Barabanki, United Province,  India – 21 August 1973 at Lahore, Pakistan) was an active advocate within the Pakistan Movement and designer of the flag of Pakistan.
Revised: Syed Ameer ud din Kidwai (1901 at Barabanki, United Province, British India – 21 August 1973 at Lahore, Pakistan) was an active advocate within the Pakistan Movement and designer of the flag of Pakistan.
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Original: Biography Kedwaii completed his LLB at Aligarh University.
Revised: Biography Kedwaii completed his LL.B at Aligarh University.
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Original:  There was a feeling of disappointment after the adoption of the Nehru Report by  All India Congress in 1928.
Revised:  There was a feeling of disappointment after the adoption of the Nehru Report by the All India Congress in 1928.
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Original:  In such circumstances,  All India Muslim Conference was founded by the Indian Muslims whose president was Sir Agha Khan and Syed Ameer ud din Kedwaii remained earlier its member and later its Secretary.
Revised:  In such circumstances, the All India Muslim Conference was founded by the Indian Muslims whose president was Sir Agha Khan and Syed Ameer ud din Kedwaii remained earlier its member and later its Secretary.
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Original:  Syed Ameer ud din Kedwaii joined All India Muslim League in 1936 and became the member of its Council in 1938.
Revised:  Syed Ameer ud din Kedwaii joined the All-India Muslim League in 1936 and became the member of its Council in 1938.
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Original:  Syed Ameer ud din Kedwaii, along with his other companions in Aligarh, drafted the "Pakistan Scheme" on the basis of which All India Muslim League developed  " Pakistan Resolution" in 1940.
Revised:  Syed Ameer ud din Kedwaii, along with his other companions in Aligarh, drafted the "Pakistan Scheme" on the basis of which All India Muslim League developed the " Pakistan Resolution" in 1940.
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Original:  He remained the faculty member of the Punjab University Law College and practiced law as a Senior Advocate .
Revised:  He remained the faculty member of the Punjab University Law College and practiced law as a senior advocate .
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Original: Syed Ameer ud din Kidwai ( 1901 – 21 August 1973) was an active advocate within the Pakistan Movement and  designer of the flag of Pakistan.
Revised: Syed Ameer ud din Kidwai ( 1901 – 21 August 1973) was an advocate for the Pakistan Movement and designer of the flag of Pakistan.
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Original: Syed Ameer ud din Kidwai ( 1901 – 21 August 1973) was an active advocate within the Pakistan Movement and  designer of the flag of Pakistan.
Revised: Syed Ameer ud din Kidwai ( 1901 – 21 August 1973) was an active advocate within the Pakistan Movement and the designer of the flag of Pakistan.
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Original:  There was a feeling of disappointment after the adoption of the Nehru Report by the All India Congress in  1928.
Revised:  There was a feeling of disappointment after the adoption of the Nehru Report by the All India Congress in , 1928.
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Original:  His first points for the club came during a Pro12 encounter with Cardiff Blues the following URL
Revised:  His first points for the club came during a Pro12 encounter with Cardiff Blues the following November.
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Original: Afrikaner people Category:White South African people Category:South African rugby union players Category:Sharks (rugby union) players Category:Sharks (Currie Cup) players Category:Cheetahs (rugby union) players Category:Free State Cheetahs players Category:Eastern Province Kings players Category:Southern Kings Super Rugby players Category:Rugby union centres Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Alumni of Grey College, Bloemfontein Category:South Africa international rugby sevens playe
Revised: Afrikaner people Category:White South African people Category:South African rugby union players Category:Sharks (rugby union) players Category:Sharks (Currie Cup) players Category:Cheetahs (rugby union) players Category:Free State Cheetahs players Category:Eastern Province Elephants players Category:Southern Kings Super Rugby players Category:Rugby union centres Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Alumni of Grey College, Bloemfontein Category:South Africa international rugby sevens playe
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Original: White South African people Category:South African rugby union players Category:Sharks (rugby union) players Category:Sharks (Currie Cup) players Category:Cheetahs (rugby union) players Category:Free State Cheetahs players Category:Eastern Province Elephants players Category:Southern Kings Super Rugby players Category:Rugby union centres Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Alumni of Grey College, Bloemfontein Category:South Africa international rugby sevens  playe
Revised: White South African people Category:South African rugby union players Category:Sharks (rugby union) players Category:Sharks (Currie Cup) players Category:Cheetahs (rugby union) players Category:Free State Cheetahs players Category:Eastern Province Elephants players Category:Southern Kings Super Rugby players Category:Rugby union centres Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Alumni of Grey College, Bloemfontein Category:South Africa international rugby sevens players Category:South Africa international rugby union playe
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Original:  Mentz's most notable achievement being his hat trick score against the Queensland Reds at Suncorp Stadium in Brisbane  .
Revised:  Mentz's most notable achievement was his hat trick score against the Queensland Reds at Suncorp Stadium in Brisbane .
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Original: Patric Michael Cilliers (born 3 March 1987 in Pietermaritzburg, South Africa ) is a rugby union player who won 6 caps for in 2012 and currently plays for Premiership Rugby side Leicester Tigers .
Revised: Patric Michael Cilliers (born 3 March 1987 ) is a rugby union player who won 6 caps for in 2012 and currently plays for Premiership Rugby side Leicester Tigers .
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Original:  After 26 appearances over 2 seasons Cilliers moved on to London Irish in the summer of 2018.
Revised:  After 26 appearances over two seasons Cilliers moved on to London Irish in the summer of 2018.
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Original: Patric Michael Cilliers (born 3 March 1987) is a rugby union player who won 6 caps for in 2012 and currently plays for Premiership side London Irish.
Revised: Patric Michael Cilliers (born 3 March 1987) is a rugby union player who won 6 caps for in 2012.
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Original:  Three things will last forever— — faith, hope, and love— — and the greatest of these is love.
Revised:  Three things will last forever— faith, hope, and love— — and the greatest of these is love.
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Original:  Three things will last forever— — faith, hope, and love— — and the greatest of these is love.
Revised:  Three things will last forever— — faith, hope, and love— and the greatest of these is love.
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Original:  (1 Corinthians 13:1—7, 13)  Smith, Michael W. and Noland, Robert.
Revised:  (1 Corinthians 13:1—7, 13) " Smith, Michael W. and Noland, Robert.
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Original: Oxford Illustrated American Dictionary (1998) Merriam-Webster Collegiate Dictionary (2000)
Revised: Oxford Illustrated American Dictionary (1998) 
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Original:  one example is the plurality of Greek words for "love" (agape, eros, "philia" "storge" ) .
Revised:  one example is the plurality of Greek words for "love" (agape, eros, philia, storge ) .
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Original:  one example is the plurality of Greek words for "love" (agape, eros, philia, storge) .
Revised:  one example is the plurality of Greek concepts for "love" (agape, eros, philia, storge) .
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Original:  An example of this range of meanings is that the love of a mother differs from the love of a spouse, which differs from the love of food.
Revised:  An example of this range of meanings is that the love of a mother differs from the love of a spouse, which differs from the love for food.
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Original:  He competes in triathlons and is four time World Champion of the XTERRA Series and ITU Cross Triathlon World Champion of off-road triathlon races.
Revised:  He competes in triathlons and is four time World Champion of the XTERRA Series and ITU Cross Triathlon World Champion . off-road triathlon races.
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Original:  He competes in triathlons and is four time World Champion of the XTERRA Series and ITU Cross Triathlon World Champion of off-road triathlon races.
Revised:  He competes in triathlons and is four time World Champion of the XTERRA Series and ITU Cross Triathlon World Champion of off-road triathlon 
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Original:  He recorded the fastest time in the cycling leg of the first ever Olympic triathlon at the 2000 Summer Olympics and usually the mountain biking leg is also his strongest of the three legs (due to his cycling background) that make up an off-road triathlon (the other two being swimming and trail running).
Revised:  At the 2000 Summer Olympics and usually the mountain biking leg is also his strongest of the three legs (due to his cycling background) that make up an off-road triathlon (the other two being swimming and trail running).
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Original:  He recorded the fastest time in the cycling leg of the first ever Olympic triathlon at the 2000 Summer Olympics and usually the mountain biking leg is also his strongest of the three legs (due to his cycling background) that make up an off-road triathlon (the other two being swimming and trail running).
Revised:  He recorded the fastest time in the cycling leg of the first ever Olympic triathlon at the 2000 Summer Olympics he broke away on the bike leg and lead for much of the race.
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Original:  After an injury-ridden 2006 season, Stoltz again asserted his dominance in the XTERRA US Championship series by winning four of five races, including the final, to be crowned 2007 US Pro champion.
Revised:  After an injury-ridden 2006 season, Stoltz bounced back and asserted his dominance in the XTERRA US Championship series by winning four of five races, including the final, to be crowned 2007 US Pro champion.
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Original:  The Caveman competes in triathlons and is four time World Champion XTERRA and three time ITU Cross Triathlon World Champion.
Revised:  He is a four time XTERRA Triathlon World Champion and a three time ITU Cross Triathlon World Champion.
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Original:  Born in Lydenburg(in the Mpumalanga province of South Africa ) he now calls Stellenbosch(near the city of Cape Town) , South Africa his hometown while he is based in Morgan Hill, California, when competing in the United States.
Revised:  Career Stoltz was born in Lydenburg, South Africa and calls Stellenbosch , South Africa his hometown while he is based in Morgan Hill, California, when competing in the United States.
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Original:  He is most famous for his exploits in the XTERRA series of off-road triathlons where he claimed the World Championship in his rookie season (starting the season without sponsorship on borrowed bikes) in 2001 and successfully defended it 2002, won XTERRA World titles in 2007 and 2010 and has won three consecutive ITU Cross Triathlon World titles in 2011,2012 and 2013.
Revised:  He is most often competes in cross triathlon, such as the XTERRA series of off-road triathlons where he claimed the World Championship in his rookie season (starting the season without sponsorship on borrowed bikes) in 2001 and successfully defended it 2002, won XTERRA World titles in 2007 and 2010 and has won three consecutive ITU Cross Triathlon World titles in 2011,2012 and 2013.
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Original:  He is most famous for his exploits in the XTERRA series of off-road triathlons where he claimed the World Championship in his rookie season (starting the season without sponsorship on borrowed bikes) in 2001 and successfully defended it 2002, won XTERRA World titles in 2007 and 2010 and has won three consecutive ITU Cross Triathlon World titles in 2011,2012 and 2013.
Revised:  He is most famous for his exploits in the XTERRA series of off-road triathlons . He claimed the XTERRA World Championship in his rookie season (starting the season without sponsorship on borrowed bikes) in 2001 and successfully defended it 2002, won XTERRA World titles in 2007 and 2010 and has won three consecutive ITU Cross Triathlon World titles in 2011,2012 and 2013.
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Original:  He is most famous for his exploits in the XTERRA series of off-road triathlons where he claimed the World Championship in his rookie season (starting the season without sponsorship on borrowed bikes) in 2001 and successfully defended it 2002, won XTERRA World titles in 2007 and 2010 and has won three consecutive ITU Cross Triathlon World titles in 2011,2012 and 2013.
Revised:  He is most famous for his exploits in the XTERRA series of off-road triathlons where he claimed the World Championship in his rookie season in 2001 and successfully defended it 2002, won XTERRA World titles in 2007 and 2010 and has won three consecutive ITU Cross Triathlon World titles in 2011,2012 and 2013.
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Original:  He is most famous for his exploits in the XTERRA series of off-road triathlons where he claimed the World Championship in his rookie season (starting the season without sponsorship on borrowed bikes) in 2001 and successfully defended it 2002, won XTERRA World titles in 2007 and 2010 and has won three consecutive ITU Cross Triathlon World titles in 2011,2012 and 2013.
Revised:  He is most famous for his exploits in the XTERRA series of off-road triathlons where he claimed the World Championship in his rookie season (starting the season without sponsorship on borrowed bikes) in 2001 and successfully defended it 2002. He again won XTERRA World titles in 2007 and 2010 and has won three consecutive ITU Cross Triathlon World titles in 2011,2012 and 2013.
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Original:  "The Caveman" has also won 10 USA XTERRA Series titles and 52 XTERRA triathlons around the world.
Revised:  In total, he has won 10 USA XTERRA Series titles and 52 XTERRA triathlons around the world.
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Original:  Trivia It is also in this series that he earned the nickname "Caveman" in all likelihood due to a combination of his large stature – he is 6 ft 4 in (1.93 m) tall and weighs between 176 lb (80 kg) and 180 lb (82 kg) – and his fearlesness and speed on bike leg.
Revised:  It is also in this series that he earned the nickname "Caveman" in all likelihood due to a combination of his large stature – he is 6 ft 4 in (1.93 m) tall and weighs between 176 lb (80 kg) and 180 lb (82 kg) – and his fearlesness and speed on bike leg.
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Original:  At the 2000 Summer Olympics  he broke away on the bike leg and lead for much of the race  . Stoltz finished 7th in the 2005 World Championship event held on his 32nd birthday on 23 October 2005 in Maui, Hawaii.
Revised:  At the 2000 Summer Olympics he broke away on the bike leg , leading part of the race . Stoltz finished 7th in the 2005 World Championship event held on his 32nd birthday on 23 October 2005 in Maui, Hawaii.
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Original:  At the 2000 Summer Olympics  he broke away on the bike leg and lead for much of the race  . Stoltz finished 7th in the 2005 World Championship event held on his 32nd birthday on 23 October 2005 in Maui, Hawaii.
Revised:  At the 2000 Summer Olympics he broke away on the bike leg and lead for much of the race . 
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Original:  After breaking his back in 3 places (30\% compression fractures) and his wrist in 8 places near the end of the 2006 season, Stoltz bounced back and asserted his dominance in the XTERRA US Championship series by winning four of five races, including the USA Championship, (2007 US XTERRA Series champion) and winning the XTERRA World Championship.
Revised:  After breaking his back in 3 places (30\% compression fractures) and his wrist in 8 places near the end of the 2006 season, Stoltz bounced back and in the XTERRA US Championship series by winning four of five races, including the USA Championship, (2007 US XTERRA Series champion) and winning the XTERRA World Championship.
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Original:  After breaking his back in 3 places (30\% compression fractures) and his wrist in 8 places near the end of the 2006 season, Stoltz bounced back and asserted his dominance in the XTERRA US Championship series by winning four of five races, including the USA Championship, (2007 US XTERRA Series champion) and winning the XTERRA World Championship.
Revised:  After breaking his back in 3 places (30\% compression fractures) and his wrist in 8 places near the end of the 2006 season, Stoltz bounced back and asserted his dominance in the XTERRA USA Championship series by winning four of five races, including the USA Championship, (2007 US XTERRA Series champion) and winning the XTERRA World Championship.
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Original:  2013  : 1st Total Sports Challenge 1st Mixed team with Liezel- Terra Firma, South Africa 1st XTERRA Buffelspoort, South Africa 2nd XTERRA Las Vegas, USA. (crashed & cut hand) 1st XTERRA Brazil, Ilhabela.
Revised:  2013 results : 1st Total Sports Challenge 1st Mixed team with Liezel- Terra Firma, South Africa 1st XTERRA Buffelspoort, South Africa 2nd XTERRA Las Vegas, USA. (crashed & cut hand) 1st XTERRA Brazil, Ilhabela.
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Original:  1st TriLanai, Lanai Hawaii 1st Val De Vie MTB Challenge, Paarl, South Africa 1st Origin of Trails MTB, Stellenbosch South Africa 2012  : 1st Total Sports Challenge 1st Mixed Team Terra Firma 1st XTERRA Buffelspoort SA. 1st West Coast Warm Water Weekend.
Revised:  1st TriLanai, Lanai Hawaii 1st Val De Vie MTB Challenge, Paarl, South Africa 1st Origin of Trails MTB, Stellenbosch South Africa 2012 results : 1st Total Sports Challenge 1st Mixed Team Terra Firma 1st XTERRA Buffelspoort SA. 1st West Coast Warm Water Weekend.
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