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Original:  Sharleen Lloyd, 16-years-old, was killed when she drove her car into a parked trailer after it left the road because she was allegedly texting (SMS) on her cellphone .
Revised:  Sharleen Lloyd, 16-years-old, was killed when she drove her car into a parked trailer after it left the road because she was allegedly texting (SMS) on her mobile phone .
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Original:  Many countries already have a ban in place of using a cellphone while driving, including the United Kingdom and the United States of America.
Revised:  Many countries already have a ban in place of using a mobile phone while driving, including the United Kingdom and the United States of America.
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Original:  Paul McCartney and Pamela Wallin, Canada's consul general to New York were invited among the 150 guests . Krall and her husband reside in New York City
Revised:  Paul McCartney and Pamela Wallin, Canada's consul general to New York were invited among the 150 guests Krall and her husband reside in New York City
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Original:  Paul McCartney and Pamela Wallin, Canada's consul general to New York were invited among the 150 guests . Krall and her husband reside in New York City
Revised:  Paul McCartney and Pamela Wallin, Canada's consul general to New York were invited among the 150 guests . 
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Original: The Bremer (Free Fair) — historically one of the oldest fairs in Germany — has its greatest event with the Free Fair Procession "Freimarktsumzug".
Revised: The (Free Fair) — historically one of the oldest fairs in Germany — has its greatest event with the Free Fair Procession "Freimarktsumzug".
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Original: The Bremer (Free Fair) — historically one of the oldest fairs in Germany — has its greatest event with the Free Fair Procession "Freimarktsumzug".
Revised: The Bremer (Free Fair) — historically one of the oldest fairs in — has its greatest event with the Free Fair Procession "Freimarktsumzug".
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Original:  The procession has started yesterday morning on the opposite site of the river Weser in the "Neustadt" and passed the city hall about one hour later.
Revised:  The procession has started yesterday morning on the opposite site of the river in the "Neustadt" and passed the city hall about one hour later.
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Original:  The event could also be viewed at television and on livestream in the web.
Revised:  The event could also be viewed at and on livestream in the web.
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Original:  Members of the Chimney Sweep Guild hang up a big heart at the as a sign of the opened market.
Revised:  Members of the Guild hang up a big heart at the as a sign of the opened market.
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Original:  The procession has started yesterday morning on the opposite site of the river in the "Neustadt" and passed the city hall about one hour later.
Revised:  The procession started yesterday morning on the opposite site of the river in the "Neustadt" and passed the city hall about one hour later.
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Original:  The procession has started yesterday morning on the opposite site of the river in the "Neustadt" and passed the city hall about one hour later.
Revised:  The procession has started yesterday morning on the opposite side of the river in the "Neustadt" and passed the city hall about one hour later.
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Original:  146 colorfully decorated groups were taking part, some of them dancing to their own music, and have been observed by about 200.000 people at the streets during more than four hours of the whole performance.
Revised:  146 colorfully decorated groups were taking part, some of them dancing to their own music, and were watched by about 200.000 people at the streets during more than four hours of the whole performance.
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Original:  146 colorfully decorated groups were taking part, some of them dancing to their own music, and have been observed by about 200.000 people at the streets during more than four hours of the whole performance.
Revised:  146 colorfully decorated groups were taking part, some of them dancing to their own music, and have been observed by about 200.000 people in the streets during more than four hours of the whole performance.
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Original:  The event could also be viewed at and on livestream in the web.
Revised:  The event could also be viewed on and on livestream in the web.
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Original:  The event could also be viewed at and on livestream in the web.
Revised:  The event could also be viewed at and on livestream on the web.
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Original:  The Free Fair has opened on the place behind the main station of the city of a week ago.
Revised:  The Free Fair opened on the place behind the main station of the city of a week ago.
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Original:  From 1700 to 1814 it began on 18 October every year.
Revised:  From 1700 to 1814 it began on October 18 every year.
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Original:  And nowadays it is "the biggest Fairground Festival in northern Germany".
Revised:  Nowadays it is "the biggest Fairground Festival in northern Germany".
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Original:  Since a few years a historical spectacle involving actors of the theatre group Shakespeare Company is part of the opening performance of the fair.
Revised:  For a few years a historical spectacle involving actors of the theatre group Shakespeare Company is part of the opening performance of the fair.
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Original:  Since a few years a historical spectacle involving actors of the theatre group Shakespeare Company is part of the opening performance of the fair.
Revised:  Since a few years , an historical spectacle involving actors of the theatre group Shakespeare Company is part of the opening performance of the fair.
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Original:  Since a few years a historical spectacle involving actors of the theatre group Shakespeare Company is part of the opening performance of the fair.
Revised:  Since a few years a historical spectacle involving actors of the theatre group Shakespeare Company has been part of the opening performance of the fair.
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Original:  This year the Freimarkt will last until Sunday 4 November .
Revised:  This year the Freimarkt is to last until Sunday 4 November .
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Original:  The subsequent degradation , especially the technically complex rides, will then take about ten days
Revised:  The subsequent degradation , especially the technically complex rides, should then take about ten days
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Original:  From 1700 to 1814 it began on October 18 every year.
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Original:  Nowadays it is "the biggest Fairground Festival in northern Germany".
Revised:  Nowadays it has been called the " biggest Fairground Festival in northern Germany".
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Original:  According (JTAC ) those who threaten the country at present include dissident republican Irish groups which will not accept the terms of the Good Friday Agreement (April 1998).
Revised:  According to JTAC those who threaten the country at present include dissident republican Irish groups which will not accept the terms of the Good Friday Agreement (April 1998).
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Original:  A further threat arises from the proliferation of weapons of mass destruction (WMD) . These are said to include nuclear, biological and chemical weapons.
Revised:  A further threat arises from the proliferation of weapons of mass destruction (WMD) which include nuclear, biological and chemical weapons.
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Original:  As part of the counter terrorist activity, trials have now started of the use of biometric identification at Heathrow International airport where passengers willing to submit their details are fast tracked through passport control.
Revised:  As part of the counter terrorist activity, trials have now started of the use of biometric identification at London Heathrow airport where passengers willing to submit their details are fast tracked through passport control.
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Original:  Mr Reid also referred to the Israeli-Palestinian problem , saying that “it fuels international terrorism”.
Revised:  Mr Reid also referred to the Israeli-Palestinian conflict saying that “it fuels international terrorism”.
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Original:  He said on GMTV’s Sunday programme, that he knew of about 30 conspiracies that were preparing to attack and that the level of alert on the MI5 web site now stands at the second highest level “severe”.
Revised:  He said on GMTV’s Sunday programme, that he knew of approximately thirty conspiracies that were preparing to attack and that the level of alert on the MI5 web site now stands at the second highest level “severe”.
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Original:  He reminded the country that republican terrorism continued for 30 years.
Revised:  He reminded the country that republican terrorism continued for thirty years.
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Original:  They are a very small proportion of the Muslim community in UK. 
Revised:  They are a very small proportion of the Muslim community in UK. "
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Original:  North Korean has conducted missile test launches and undertaken a nuclear test.
Revised:  North Korea has conducted missile test launches and undertaken a nuclear test.
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Original:  It's fine if North Korea can bring some contribution to peace, but simply starting talks is not meaningful," said chairman of the Liberal Democratic Party's policy research council in Japan, Shoichi Nakagawa.
Revised: " It's fine if North Korea can bring some contribution to peace, but simply starting talks is not meaningful," said chairman of the Liberal Democratic Party's policy research council in Japan, Shoichi Nakagawa.
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Original:  Shinzo Abe, the Prime Minister of Japan also stated that talks should resume only if " abandons their nuclear program" and that "concrete results" must been seen "early."
Revised:  " abandons their nuclear program" and that "concrete results" must been seen "early."
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Original:  Shinzo Abe, the Prime Minister of Japan also stated that talks should resume only if " abandons their nuclear program" and that "concrete results" must been seen "early."
Revised:  Shinzo Abe, the Prime Minister of Japan also stated that talks should resume only if " 
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Original:  " [We expect] early and concrete results.
Revised:  [We expect] early and concrete results.
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Original:  We believe it is necessary for North Korea to show concrete actions toward the abandonment of all nuclear weapons and existing nuclear programs," said Abe .
Revised:  We believe it is necessary for North Korea to show concrete actions toward the abandonment of all nuclear weapons and existing nuclear programs," said Shinzo Abe, the Prime Minister of Japan .
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Original:  The planets Mars, Mercury and Jupiter will line up and will be seen in clear skies at least 45 minutes before sunrise, and will be seen as nearly overlapping each morning until they begin to diverge positionally December 14, 2006. for stargazers is playing this week in all of Africa, as far east as northeastern India and .
Revised:  The planets Mars, Mercury and Jupiter will line up and will be seen in clear skies at least 45 minutes before sunrise, and will be seen each morning until they begin to diverge positionally December 14, 2006. for stargazers is playing this week in all of Africa, as far east as northeastern India and .
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Original:  The planets Mars, Mercury and Jupiter will line up and will be seen in clear skies at least 45 minutes before sunrise, and will be seen as nearly overlapping each morning until they begin to diverge positionally December 14, 2006. for stargazers is playing this week in all of Africa, as far east as northeastern India and .
Revised:  The planets Mars, Mercury and Jupiter will line up and will be seen in clear skies at least 45 minutes before sunrise, and will be seen as nearly overlapping each morning until December 14, 2006. for stargazers is playing this week in all of Africa, as far east as northeastern India and .
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The lineup may be visible from higher south faces in Alpine regions like these slopes in the . Local terrain and will also be a factor such that the may block viewing in , but the higher altitudes in the , , he lineup will be visible higher in the sky and somewhat sooner in the local time as one is located farther south in eastern US coastal cities, to longitudes as far west as the Florida panhandle just before the local Sunrise.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Local terrain and will also be a factor such that the may block viewing in , but the higher altitudes in the , , he lineup will be visible higher in the sky and somewhat sooner in the local time as one is located farther south in eastern US coastal cities, to longitudes as far west as the Florida panhandle just before the local Sunrise.
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Original:  Trailing both is the New Democratic Party with 10\% and Bloc Québécois and the Green party each with 8\%            
Revised:  Trailing both is the New Democratic Party with 10\% and Bloc Québécois and the Green party each with 8\% . 
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Original:  The is the highest Liberal support  since former Prime Minister Jean Chrétien stepped down as prime minister and party leader three years ago.
Revised:  This is the highest Liberal support since former Prime Minister Jean Chrétien stepped down as prime minister and party leader three years ago.
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Original: Four per cent of the surveyed people said the Conservatives are the best party to deal with enviroment issues.
Revised: Four per cent of those surveyed said the Conservatives are the best party to deal with enviroment issues.
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Original: The Liberals lead in every province except oil-producing Alberta, which is lead by the Conservatives, and Quebec at 26.1\%, where the separatist Bloc Quebecois is leading with 34.7\%.
Revised: The Liberals lead in every province except oil-producing Alberta, which is led by the Conservatives, and Quebec at 26.1\%, where the separatist Bloc Quebecois is leading with 34.7\%.
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Original:  It will also try and decrease the amount of advertising unhealthy food companies are given.
Revised:  It will also try to decrease the amount of advertising unhealthy food companies are given.
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Original:  "Today's agreement is a major step forward for the Food Industry Accord and shows once again what can be achieved when we reach for cooperative, rather than regulatory solutions. 
Revised:  "Today's agreement is a major step forward for the Food Industry Accord and shows once again what can be achieved when we reach for cooperative, rather than regulatory solutions. "
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Original:  On the other hand, as Pamuk intended, the criminal case brought international attention to the absence of freedom of speech in Turkey.
Revised:  On the other hand, as Pamuk intended, the criminal case brought international attention to freedom of speech in Turkey.
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Original: The lenghty debate was the third longest in the history of the House of Lords.
Revised: The lengthy debate was the third longest in the history of the House of Lords.
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Original: A 4-year old kindergartener, attending La Vega Primary School in Waco, TX, was suspended November 10 after hugging a teacher's aide and rubbed his face in the teacher aide's chest.
Revised: A 4-year old kindergartener, attending La Vega Primary School in Waco, TX, was suspended November 10 after hugging a teacher's aide and rubbing his face in the teacher aide's chest.
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Original: A 4-year old kindergartener, attending La Vega Primary School in Waco, TX, was suspended November 10 after hugging a teacher's aide and rubbed his face in the teacher aide's chest.
Revised: A 4-year old kindergartener, attending La Vega Primary School in Waco, TX, was suspended November 10 after hugging a teacher's aide and rubbed his face in the her chest.
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Original:  however, it does state that "inappropriate physical contact" well result in a discipline referral.
Revised:  however, it does state that "inappropriate physical contact" will result in a discipline referral.
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Original: The La Vega school district sent a letter to the student's father, who flipped after learning of his son's "inappropriate physical behavior interpreted as sexual contact and/or sexual harassment".
Revised: The La Vega school district sent a letter to the student's father, who was upset after learning of his son's "inappropriate physical behavior interpreted as sexual contact and/or sexual harassment".
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Original: A 4-year old kindergartener , attending La Vega Primary School in Waco, Texas, was suspended November 10 after hugging a teacher's aide and  rubbing his face in her chest.
Revised: A 4-year old kindergartener , attending La Vega Primary School in Waco, Texas, was suspended November 10 after hugging a teacher's aide and supposedly rubbing his face in her chest.
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Original:   The school district would not comment on specific details, citing student privacy laws
Revised:  According The school district would not comment on specific details, citing student privacy laws
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Original:  This managing firm began its activity in 1996 and since then has grown to operate capitals of 79 institutional clients (estimated in approximately 3 billion dollars)  
Revised:  This managing firm began its activity in 1996 and since then has grown to operate capitals of 79 institutional clients (estimated in approximately 3 billion dollars) . 
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Original:  I hope and pray that the American leaders of today, and tomorrow, will provide it. 
Revised:  I hope and pray that the American leaders of today, and tomorrow, will provide it. "
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Original:  He has been praised as "a genuine progressive" by Ralph Nader and in 2003, Kucinich was the recipient of the Gandhi Peace Awar 
Revised:  He has been praised as "a genuine progressive" by Ralph Nader and in 2003, Kucinich was the recipient of the Gandhi Peace Award. 
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Original:  If elected, he would be the country's first vegan presiden
Revised:  If elected, he would be the country's first vegan president
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Original: Category:North AmericaCategory:United StatesCategory:Politics and conflicts American politician of the Democratic party, Dennis Kucinich, plans to run for president in 2008 the five-term congressman's spokesman, Andy Juniewicz, said Monday.
Revised:  American politician of the Democratic party, Dennis Kucinich, plans to run for president in 2008 the five-term congressman's spokesman, Andy Juniewicz, said Monday.
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Original: An $11 million extention will be put into place on Tuesday during the first of the mission's three spacewalks.
Revised: An $11 million extension will be put into place on Tuesday during the first of the mission's three spacewalks.
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Original: An $11 million extension will be put into place on Tuesday during the first of the mission's three spacewalks.
Revised: A $11 million extension will be put into place on Tuesday during the first of the mission's three spacewalks.
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Original: The Space Shuttle Discovery The U.S. Space Shuttle Discovery docked with the International Space Station today at 5:12 p.m. ET.
Revised: The Space Shuttle Discovery The United States Space Shuttle Discovery docked with the International Space Station today at 5:12 p.m. ET.
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Original:  Astronaut , Sunita "Suni" Williams , will live for six months at the space lab, replacing German astronaut Thomas Reiter of the European Space Agency.
Revised:  Astronaut Sunita "Suni" Williams , will live for six months at the space lab, replacing German astronaut Thomas Reiter of the European Space Agency.
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Original:  Astronaut , Sunita "Suni" Williams , will live for six months at the space lab, replacing German astronaut Thomas Reiter of the European Space Agency.
Revised:  Astronaut , Sunita "Suni" Williams will live for six months at the space lab, replacing German astronaut Thomas Reiter of the European Space Agency.
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Original:   A $11 million extension will be put into place on Tuesday during the first of the mission's three spacewalks.
Revised:  . A $11 million extension will be put into place on Tuesday during the first of the mission's three spacewalks.
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Original:  Astronauts plan to rewire the space lab, switching it from a temporary  source to a permanent one, during the two other spacewalks
Revised:  Astronauts plan to rewire the space lab, switching it from a temporary power source to a permanent one, during the two other spacewalks
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Original:  Category:Deletion requests It has been reported in the Italian press that the United States may not have been informed of the operation to rescue kidnapped Italian journalist, Giuliana Sgrena, in which the intelligence agent Nicola Calipari was killed by US troops.
Revised:  It has been reported in the Italian press that the United States may not have been informed of the operation to rescue kidnapped Italian journalist, Giuliana Sgrena, in which the intelligence agent Nicola Calipari was killed by US troops.
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Original: It has been reported in the Italian press that the United States may not have been informed of the operation to rescue kidnapped Italian journalist, Giuliana Sgrena, in which the intelligence agent Nicola Calipari was killed by US troops.
Revised: The Italian dailies La Repubblica and Corriere della Sera are reporting that US forces may not have been informed of the operation to rescue kidnapped Italian journalist, Giuliana Sgrena, in which the intelligence agent Nicola Calipari was killed by US troops.
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Original:    Speaking in the La Repubblica newspaper, General Mario Marioli assisted those involved in the operation in Baghdad  by obtaining a special badge for them from coalition forces upon their arrival.
Revised:  Speaking in the La Repubblica newspaper, General Mario Marioli assisted those involved in the operation in Baghdad , by obtaining a special badge for them from coalition forces upon their arrival.
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Original:  However the second-in-command of the coalition forces in Iraq  was unaware of their purpose in Iraq, so  could not tell the US what their missionwas .
Revised:  However the second-in-command of the coalition forces in Iraq was unaware of their purpose in Iraq, so he could not tell the US what their missionwas .
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Original:  Basil Academy in Garrison, New York, were they ran to the finish line  . Rob Diaz and Kimberly Chabolla were in second and Lynn Turk and Karlyn Harris were in last.
Revised:  Basil Academy in Garrison, New York, they ran to the finish line . Rob Diaz and Kimberly Chabolla were in second and Lynn Turk and Karlyn Harris were in last.
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Original:  The two elections in the Meath and Kildare North constituencies are taking place to elect two new TD's to the Dail after the two former repersentitives ;
Revised:  The two elections in the Meath and Kildare North constituencies are taking place to elect two new TD's to the Dail after the two former representatives ;
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Original:  There is expected to be a large number of votes  in the last hour of voting as commuters return home from Dublin.
Revised:  A large number of votes in the last hour of voting as commuters return home from Dublin.
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Original:  There is expected to be a large number of votes  in the last hour of voting as commuters return home from Dublin.
Revised:  There is expected to be a large number of votes was expected in the last hour of voting as commuters return home from Dublin.
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