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Original:  To "refocus their attention on the one-state solution where Muslims, Christians and Jews can live as equals", Erekat said, is the only option left for the Palestinians.
Revised:  To "refocus their attention on the one-state solution where Muslims, Christians and Jews can live as equals", Erekat said, is the only door open for the Palestinians.
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Original: The political fallout from the sacking of Professor David Nutt as chairman of the UK 's Advisory Council on the Misuse of Drugs (ACMD) by Home Secretary Alan Johnston on Friday 30  October 2009 is gathering momentum.
Revised: The political fallout from the sacking of Professor David Nutt as chairman of the United Kingdom 's Advisory Council on the Misuse of Drugs (ACMD) by Home Secretary Alan Johnston on Friday 30 October 2009 is gathering momentum.
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Original: The political fallout from the sacking of Professor David Nutt as chairman of the UK 's Advisory Council on the Misuse of Drugs (ACMD) by Home Secretary Alan Johnston on Friday 30  October 2009 is gathering momentum.
Revised: The political fallout from the sacking of Professor David Nutt as chairman of the UK 's Advisory Council on the Misuse of Drugs (ACMD) by Home Secretary Alan Johnston on Friday 30 , October 2009 is gathering momentum.
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Original:  In his letter dismissing Professor Nutt, Johnston asserted "He was asked to go because he cannot be both a government adviser and a campaigner against government policy. ... " . An article was subsequently published in the online edition of The Times arguing that Professor Nutt's lecture appeared conformant to government guidelines throughout.
Revised:  In his letter dismissing Professor Nutt, Johnston asserted "He was asked to go because he cannot be both a government adviser and a campaigner against government policy. " . An article was subsequently published in the online edition of The Times arguing that Professor Nutt's lecture appeared conformant to government guidelines throughout.
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Original:  In his letter dismissing Professor Nutt, Johnston asserted "He was asked to go because he cannot be both a government adviser and a campaigner against government policy. ... " . An article was subsequently published in the online edition of The Times arguing that Professor Nutt's lecture appeared conformant to government guidelines throughout.
Revised:  In his letter dismissing Professor Nutt, Johnston asserted "He was asked to go because he cannot be both a government adviser and a campaigner against government policy. ... " An article was subsequently published in the online edition of The Times arguing that Professor Nutt's lecture appeared conformant to government guidelines throughout.
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Original:  In his letter dismissing Professor Nutt, Johnston asserted "He was asked to go because he cannot be both a government adviser and a campaigner against government policy. ... " . An article was subsequently published in the online edition of The Times arguing that Professor Nutt's lecture appeared conformant to government guidelines throughout.
Revised:  In his letter dismissing Professor Nutt, Johnston asserted "He was asked to go because he cannot be both a government adviser and a campaigner against government policy. ... " . An article was subsequently published in the online edition of The Times arguing that Professor Nutt's lecture appeared to conform to government guidelines throughout.
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Original:  A Facebook group in support of Professor Nutt has already gathered more than 17000 members.
Revised:  A Facebook group in support of Professor Nutt has already gathered more than 17,000 members.
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Original:  A public demonstration in support of Professor Nutt has been planned for Saturday November 7  2009 to take place outside Downing Street
Revised:  A public demonstration in support of Professor Nutt is planned for Saturday November 7 2009 to take place outside Downing Street
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Original:  A public demonstration in support of Professor Nutt has been planned for Saturday November 7  2009 to take place outside Downing Street
Revised:  A public demonstration in support of Professor Nutt has been planned for Saturday November 7 , 2009 to take place outside Downing Street
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Original: The political fallout from the sacking of Professor David Nutt as chairman of the United Kingdom's Advisory Council on the Misuse of Drugs (ACMD) by Home Secretary Alan Johnston on Friday 30, October 2009 is gathering momentum.
Revised: The political fallout from the sacking of Professor David Nutt as chairman of the United Kingdom's Advisory Council on the Misuse of Drugs (ACMD) by Home Secretary Alan Johnston on Friday is gathering momentum.
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Original:  A public demonstration in support of Professor Nutt is planned for Saturday November 7, 2009 to take place outside Downing Street
Revised:  A public demonstration in support of Professor Nutt is planned for Saturday to take place outside Downing Street
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Original: Vietnamese media reported on Wednesday that at least 90 people have been killed after tropical storm Mirinae passed through the country.
Revised: Vietnamese media reported on Wednesday that at least 90 people have been killed after Tropical Storm Mirinae passed through the country.
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Original:  The Vietnamese disaster committe said that "it's the most devastating flooding in more than 30 years in Phu Yen."
Revised:  The Vietnamese disaster committee said that "it's the most devastating flooding in more than 30 years in Phu Yen."
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Original: According to Vietnam News,  154 houses were destroyed by the storm , damaged 2,500 others, and flooded 1,800 hectares of farmland.
Revised: According to Vietnam News, 154 houses , damaged 2,500 others, and flooded 1,800 hectares of farmland.
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Original: The US car manufacturer General Motors said that it would fire 10,000 workers at its European division, Opel.
Revised: The US car manufacturer General Motors said that it would axe 10,000 workers at its European division, Opel.
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Original: The US car manufacturer General Motors said that it would fire 10,000 workers at its European division, Opel.
Revised: The US car manufacturer General Motors said that it would fire 10,000 jobs at its European division, Opel.
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Original: The   UK government, however, welcomed the firm's decision.
Revised: The The UK government, however, welcomed the firm's decision.
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Original: As part of the compromise, a walkway connecting the suburbs main road to the residential area near the new McDonald's has been closed off.
Revised: As part of the compromise, a walkway connecting the suburb's main road to the residential area near the new McDonald's has been closed off.
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Original:  “ They will all be restricted to Nicklin Way, ” said John Meyer-Gleaves, a spokesperson for protest group Say No To McDonald's, referring to late night customers.
Revised:  " They will all be restricted to Nicklin Way, ” said John Meyer-Gleaves, a spokesperson for protest group Say No To McDonald's, referring to late night customers.
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Original:  “ They will all be restricted to Nicklin Way, ” said John Meyer-Gleaves, a spokesperson for protest group Say No To McDonald's, referring to late night customers.
Revised:  “ They will all be restricted to Nicklin Way, " said John Meyer-Gleaves, a spokesperson for protest group Say No To McDonald's, referring to late night customers.
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Original:  The group also managed to get a higher wall put in between the store and the residential area to cut noise and light pollution.
Revised:  The group also managed to get a higher wall placed between the store and the residential area to cut noise and light pollution.
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Original:  The 24-hour McDonald's in Councillor Thompson's division, in Mooloolaba, is part of a larger complex and does not back onto residential premises.
Revised:  The 24-hour McDonald's in Councillor Thompson's division, Mooloolaba, is part of a larger complex and does not back onto residential premises.
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Original: Toyota headquarters in Japan Akio Toyoda, the President and Representative Director of Toyota  made a statement on Wednesday that the company is leaving the Formula One championship before the 2010 season.
Revised: Toyota headquarters in Japan Akio Toyoda, the President and Representative Director of Toyota , made a statement on Wednesday that the company is leaving the Formula One championship before the 2010 season.
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Original:  The primary deciding factor of this decision was claimed the current severe economic environment in the midterm perspective.
Revised:  The primary factor behind this decision was claimed the current severe economic environment in the midterm perspective.
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Original:  The primary deciding factor of this decision was claimed the current severe economic environment in the midterm perspective.
Revised:  The primary deciding factor of this decision was claimed to be the current economic environment in the midterm perspective.
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Original:  Another major japanese automotive giantHonda quitted the Formula One prior to this season and sold the team to Ross Brawn.
Revised:  Another major Japanese automotive giant, Honda, quit Formula One prior to this season and sold the team to Ross Brawn.
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Original:  The renewed team Brawn GP with Mercedes-Benz engined cars had won the 2009 constructors' championship recently.
Revised:  The renewed team Brawn GP with Mercedes-Benz engined cars won the 2009 constructors' championship recently.
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Original:  The renewed team Brawn GP with Mercedes-Benz engined cars had won the 2009 constructors' championship recently.
Revised:  The renewed team Brawn GP with Mercedes-Benz engined cars had won the 2009 Constructors' Championship recently.
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Original:  The vacation cleared by Toyota may be now used by the BMW Sauber team  possible successor, if BMW could reach an agreement to sell the team after their decision to quit from the Formula One earlier this year.
Revised:  The space cleared by Toyota may be now used by the BMW Sauber team possible successor, if BMW could reach an agreement to sell the team after their decision to quit from the Formula One earlier this year.
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Original:  The vacation cleared by Toyota may be now used by the BMW Sauber team  possible successor, if BMW could reach an agreement to sell the team after their decision to quit from the Formula One earlier this year.
Revised:  The vacation cleared by Toyota may be now used by the BMW Sauber team 's possible successor, if BMW could reach an agreement to sell the team after their decision to quit from the Formula One earlier this year.
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Original:  The vacation cleared by Toyota may be now used by the BMW Sauber team  possible successor, if BMW could reach an agreement to sell the team after their decision to quit from the Formula One earlier this year.
Revised:  The vacation cleared by Toyota may be now used by the BMW Sauber team possible successor, if BMW can reach an agreement to sell the team after their decision to quit from the Formula One earlier this year.
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Original:  The vacation cleared by Toyota may be now used by the BMW Sauber team  possible successor, if BMW could reach an agreement to sell the team after their decision to quit from the Formula One earlier this year.
Revised:  The vacation cleared by Toyota may be now used by the BMW Sauber team possible successor, if BMW could reach an agreement to sell the team after their decision to quit Formula One earlier this year.
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Original:  Toyota drivers of this season Jarno Trulli and Timo Glock, as well as the japanese rookie driver Kamui Kobayashi, could now search seats in other teams for 2010 including the new entrees US F1, Campos, Manor or Lotus.
Revised:  Toyota drivers of this season Jarno Trulli and Timo Glock, as well as the Japanese rookie driver Kamui Kobayashi, could now search seats in other teams for 2010 including the new entrees US F1, Campos, Manor or Lotus.
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Original:  Toyota drivers of this season Jarno Trulli and Timo Glock, as well as the japanese rookie driver Kamui Kobayashi, could now search seats in other teams for 2010 including the new entrees US F1, Campos, Manor or Lotus.
Revised:  Toyota drivers of this season Jarno Trulli and Timo Glock, as well as the japanese rookie driver Kamui Kobayashi, could now look for seats in other teams for 2010 including the new entrees US F1, Campos, Manor or Lotus.
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Original:  Toyota drivers of this season Jarno Trulli and Timo Glock, as well as the japanese rookie driver Kamui Kobayashi, could now search seats in other teams for 2010 including the new entrees US F1, Campos, Manor or Lotus.
Revised:  Toyota drivers of this season Jarno Trulli and Timo Glock, as well as the japanese rookie driver Kamui Kobayashi, could now search seats in other teams for 2010 including the new entries US F1, Campos, Manor or Lotus.
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Original: A new book released today by author Marc Headley, Blown for Good, reveals details inside Scientology headquarters at the organization's "Gold Base", located north of Hemet, California.
Revised: A new book released today by author Marc Headley, Blown for Good, reveals details inside Scientology headquarters at the organization's "Gold Base", located near Hemet, California.
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Original:  Headley says he started to question his involvement in Scientology when secretly listening to The John and Ken Show and watching Conan O'Brien make fun of Scientology celebrities.
Revised:  Headley writes in the book that he started to question his involvement in Scientology when secretly listening to The John and Ken Show and watching Conan O'Brien make fun of Scientology celebrities.
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Original: The Indian government has decided to hike the budget of the 2010 New Delhi Commonwealth Games from Rs. 767 crore ($163 million) to Rs. 1,620 crore ($344 million).
Revised: The Indian government has raised the budget of the 2010 New Delhi Commonwealth Games from Rs. 767 crore ($163 million) to Rs. 1,620 crore ($344 million).
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Original:  The decision was taken at a meeting of the cabinet led by Prime Minister Manmohan Singh in New Delhi.
Revised:  The decision was made at a meeting of the cabinet led by Prime Minister Manmohan Singh in New Delhi.
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Original:  Ambika Soni, the Information and Broadcasting Minister stated, "The cabinet approved the proposal of the Ministry of Youth Affairs and Sports for providing a revised budget of Rs .1 ,620 crore, as loan to the Organising Committee (OC) of the Commonwealth Games, 2010, at the prevailing government rate of interest."
Revised:  Ambika Soni, the Information and Broadcasting Minister stated, "The cabinet approved the proposal of the Ministry of Youth Affairs and Sports for providing a revised budget of Rs . 1 ,620 crore, as loan to the Organising Committee (OC) of the Commonwealth Games, 2010, at the prevailing government rate of interest."
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Original: The car model, which is known as the T.27, is due to be developed over the course of the next sixteen months , with four prototypes being developed .
Revised: The car model, which is known as the T.27, is due to be developed over the course of the next 16 months with four prototypes being developed .
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Original: The car model, which is known as the T.27, is due to be developed over the course of the next sixteen months , with four prototypes being developed .
Revised: The car model, which is known as the T.27, is due to be developed over the course of the next sixteen months , with four prototypes .
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Original:  The vehicle is designed for urban purposes, such as in cities or towns.
Revised:  The electric car is designed for urban purposes, such as in cities or towns.
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Original:  The vehicle has the ability to travel at speeds of up to 60 miles per hour .
Revised:  It has the ability to travel at speeds of up to 60 miles per hour .
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Original:  The technology iStream had been invented by Gordon Murray in 1999 and means that all the parts are designed by computer.
Revised:  The technology iStream had been invented by Gordon Murray in 1999 and means that all the parts are designed using a computer.
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Original:  Murray said that the new car will be  the most efficient electric vehicle on earth 
Revised:  Murray believes that the new car will be the most efficient electric vehicle on earth 
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Original:  Murray said that the new car will be  the most efficient electric vehicle on earth 
Revised:  Murray said that the new car will be ' the most efficient electric vehicle on earth 
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Original:  Murray said that the new car will be  the most efficient electric vehicle on earth 
Revised:  Murray said that the new car will be the most efficient electric vehicle on earth '
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Original: According to Nader, Nidal is a US-born Muslim who had joined the military after finishing high school, and was a graduate of the Virginia Techhigh school , where he received a bachelor’s degree in biochemistry.
Revised: According to Nader, Nidal is a US-born Muslim who had joined the military after finishing high school, and was a graduate of Virginia Tech , where he received a bachelor’s degree in biochemistry.
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Original:  The gunman are reported to have been in uniform and using handguns.
Revised:  The gunman is reported to have been in uniform and using handguns.
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Original:  The authorities are still gathering information about the shooting, according to Homeland Security spokewoman Sara Kuban.
Revised:  The authorities are still gathering information about the shooting, according to Homeland Security spokeswoman Sara Kuban.
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Original: “We don’t have reason to believe that this is anything other than an isolated incident,” an army spokesman from Fort Lewis in in the state of Washington, Joe Piek, commented.
Revised: “We don’t have reason to believe that this is anything other than an isolated incident,” an army spokesman from Fort Lewis in the state of Washington, Joe Piek, commented.
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Original:  “We don’t normally discuss security operations at the post any ways , but I am sure this is something that our security law enforcement will be reviewing.
Revised:  “We don’t normally discuss security operations at the post anyways , but I am sure this is something that our security law enforcement will be reviewing.
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Original: Response President Barack Obama described the incident as "a horrific outburst of violence" in a press conference in Washington D.C., going on to say, "It is difficult enough when we lose these brave men and women abroad, but it is horrifying that they should come under fire at an army base on US soil.
Revised:  President Barack Obama described the incident as "a horrific outburst of violence" in a press conference in Washington D.C., going on to say, "It is difficult enough when we lose these brave men and women abroad, but it is horrifying that they should come under fire at an army base on US soil.
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Original: Response President Barack Obama described the incident as "a horrific outburst of violence" in a press conference in Washington D.C., going on to say, "It is difficult enough when we lose these brave men and women abroad, but it is horrifying that they should come under fire at an army base on US soil.
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Original:  "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% I am keeping those affected by today's incidents in our thoughts and prayers," he said.
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Original:  "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% I am keeping those affected by today's incidents in our thoughts and prayers," he said.
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Original:  An additional 31 are reported wounded, and the gunman is in stable condition after being shot by military police.
Revised:  An additional thirty are reported wounded, and the gunman is in stable condition after being shot by military police.
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Original:  It should be noted Major Hasan is an alumni of Virginia Tech.
Revised:  It should be noted Major Hasan is an alumnus of Virginia Tech.
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Original:  “ We get patients like this, but not usually all at once, ” said director Glen Couchman.
Revised:  " We get patients like this, but not usually all at once, ” said director Glen Couchman.
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Original:  “ We get patients like this, but not usually all at once, ” said director Glen Couchman.
Revised:  “ We get patients like this, but not usually all at once, " said director Glen Couchman.
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Original:  “ We don’t have reason to believe that this is anything other than an isolated incident, ” an army spokesman from Fort Lewis in the state of Washington, Joe Piek, commented.
Revised:  " We don’t have reason to believe that this is anything other than an isolated incident, ” an army spokesman from Fort Lewis in the state of Washington, Joe Piek, commented.
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Original:  “ We don’t have reason to believe that this is anything other than an isolated incident, ” an army spokesman from Fort Lewis in the state of Washington, Joe Piek, commented.
Revised:  “ We don’t have reason to believe that this is anything other than an isolated incident, " an army spokesman from Fort Lewis in the state of Washington, Joe Piek, commented.
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Original:  “ We don’t normally discuss security operations at the post anyways, but I am sure this is something that our security law enforcement will be reviewing.
Revised:  " We don’t normally discuss security operations at the post anyways, but I am sure this is something that our security law enforcement will be reviewing.
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Original: The government of Saudi Arabia removed an eleven-year ban on livestock imports from Somalia after fears of Rift Valley Fever were allayed, senior Somali officials said on Thursday.
Revised: The government of Saudi Arabia removed an eleven-year ban on livestock imports from Somalia after fears of were allayed, senior Somali officials said on Thursday.
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Original:  An official with the Puntland Meat Processing Authority told the Voice of America news agency that they expect to export more than half a million heads of goats and cows to Saudi Arabia in time for the Hajj , the annual Muslim pilgrimage, which will be performed by early December
Revised:  An official with the Meat Processing Authority told the Voice of America news agency that they expect to export more than half a million heads of goats and cows to Saudi Arabia in time for the Hajj , the annual Muslim pilgrimage, which will be performed by early December
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Original:  An official with the Puntland Meat Processing Authority told the Voice of America news agency that they expect to export more than half a million heads of goats and cows to Saudi Arabia in time for the Hajj , the annual Muslim pilgrimage, which will be performed by early December
Revised:  An official with the Puntland Meat Processing Authority told the Voice of America news agency that they expect to export more than half a million heads of goats and cows to Saudi Arabia in time for the , the annual Muslim pilgrimage, which will be performed by early December
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