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Original:  The crash of Garuda Indonesia Flight 200 killed twenty-one people, most being Indonesian nationals and five being Australians  following a visit by then Australian Foreign Minister Alexander Downer.
Revised:  The crash of Garuda Indonesia Flight 200 killed twenty-one people, most being Indonesian nationals and five being Australians , following a visit by then Australian Foreign Minister Alexander Downer.
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Original:  Garuda sent the pilot, Marwoto Komar, an ultimatum requesting his resignation , which he complied with . Had he failed to do so, his employment would have been terminated.
Revised:  Garuda sent the pilot, Marwoto Komar, an ultimatum requesting his resignation with which he complied with . Had he failed to do so, his employment would have been terminated.
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Original:  Garuda sent the pilot, Marwoto Komar, an ultimatum requesting his resignation , which he complied with . Had he failed to do so, his employment would have been terminated.
Revised:  Garuda sent the pilot, Marwoto Komar, an ultimatum requesting his resignation , which he complied . Had he failed to do so, his employment would have been terminated.
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Original:  Mr Komar was arrested early this month, but  subsequently released on bail on February 15.
Revised:  Mr Komar was arrested early this month, but was subsequently released on bail on February 15.
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Original: The American Civil Liberties Union (ACLU) and the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) have sided with Wikileaks.org and will defend them against a lawsuit with took the site off line in the United States.
Revised: The American Civil Liberties Union (ACLU) and the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) have sided with Wikileaks.org and will defend them against a lawsuit which took the site off line in the United States.
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Original:  On February 18, 2008, a permanent court injunction issued in the California Northern District Court in San Francisco by judge Jeffrey White, California to Bank Julius Baer (BJB), a Swiss Bank took the domain name and the site off line in the U.S..
Revised:  On February 18, 2008, a permanent court injunction issued in the California Northern District Court in San Francisco by judge Jeffrey White, California to Bank Julius Baer (BJB), a Swiss Bank took the domain name and the site offline in the U.S..
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Original: On February 18, 2008, a permanent court injunction issued in the California Northern District Court in San Francisco by judge Jeffrey White, California to Bank Julius Baer (BJB), a Swiss Bank  took the domain name offline.
Revised: On February 18, 2008, a permanent court injunction issued in the California Northern District Court in San Francisco by judge Jeffrey White, California to Bank Julius Baer (BJB), a Swiss Bank , took the domain name offline.
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Original: "Wikileaks at all times responded with grace and dignity to BJBs highly irregular demands and left communication open," said Wikileaks which also adds that the correspondence with the Bank are available on its website on servers in Denmark.
Revised: "Wikileaks at all times responded with grace and dignity to BJBs highly irregular demands and left communication open," said Wikileaks which also adds that the correspondence with the Bank is available on its website on servers in Denmark.
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Original: The 's largest car manufacturer today named Mary Barra as its new chief executive.
Revised: The 's largest car manufacturer today named as its new chief executive.
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Original:  She replaces Dan Akerson , who was appointed by the government as both chief executive and chairman in 2009 during the company's bankruptcy.
Revised:  She replaces , who was appointed by the government as both chief executive and chairman in 2009 during the company's bankruptcy.
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Original:  Akerson will also relinquish his chairman role, to be replaced by current director Theodore "Tim" Solso .
Revised:  Akerson will also relinquish his chairman role, to be replaced by current director .
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Original:  The company also announced head of finance Dan Ammann as its new president.
Revised:  The company also announced head of finance as its new president.
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Original:  Akerson plans to stand down on January 15 following his wife's advanced cancer diagnosis. thumbnail|General Motors' logo.
Revised:  Akerson plans to stand down on January 15 following his wife's advanced cancer diagnosis. 
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Original:  The British government announced today that marriages in England and Wales between members of the same-sex will start being conducted from March 29 of next year.
Revised:  The government announced today that marriages in England and Wales between members of the same-sex will start being conducted from March 29 of next year.
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Original:  The British government announced today that marriages in England and Wales between members of the same-sex will start being conducted from March 29 of next year.
Revised:  The British government announced today that marriages in and between members of the same-sex will start being conducted from March 29 of next year.
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Original:  The British government announced today that marriages in England and Wales between members of the same-sex will start being conducted from March 29 of next year.
Revised:  The British government announced today that marriages in England and Wales between members of the will be conducted from March 29 of next year.
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Original:  The change follows the passage of the Marriage (Same Sex Couples) Act earlier this year.
Revised:  The change follows the passage of the earlier this year.
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Original:  The deputy prime minister  , said on that it was "great news"
Revised:  The deputy prime minister , , said on that it was "great news"
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Original: The equalities minister Maria Miller said: "Marriage is one of our most important institutions, and from 29 March 2014 it will be open to everyone, irrespective of whether they fall in love with someone of the same sex or opposite sex.
Revised: The equalities minister said: "Marriage is one of our most important institutions, and from 29 March 2014 it will be open to everyone, irrespective of whether they fall in love with someone of the same sex or opposite sex.
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Original:  The former president of South Africa passed away last Thursday at his home, aged 95. picture select|width=610px |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the . |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the . |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the . |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the . |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the Malaysian Embassy, London.
Revised:  The former president of South Africa passed away last Thursday at his home, aged picture select|width=610px |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the . |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the . |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the . |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the . |center|up The lowered to half-mast at the Malaysian Embassy, London.
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Original: Embassies and high commissions across the city of , have lowered their flags today in honour of the death of Nelson Mandela .
Revised: Embassies and high commissions across the city of , have lowered their flags today in honour of the death of .
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Original: A team of research doctors and scientists  have discovered the gene that cause the rare heart condition w: Arrhythmogenic right ventricular dysplasia.
Revised: A team of research doctors and scientists have discovered the gene that cause the rare heart condition Arrhythmogenic right ventricular dysplasia.
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Original:  The disease is abnormally high in the w:Canadian Province of w: Newfoundland and Labrador where the gene has been identified . Dr. Terry-Lynn Young of Newfoundland and her team of researchers at w: Memorial University of Newfoundland made the discovery after  research of the occurrence of the condition in a number of families   
Revised:  ARVC is believed to be higher in Canadian province of Newfoundland and Labrador where the gene has been identified . Dr. Terry-Lynn Young of Newfoundland and her team of researchers at w: Memorial University of Newfoundland made the discovery after research of the occurrence of the condition in a number of families 
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Original:  The disease is abnormally high in the w:Canadian Province of w: Newfoundland and Labrador where the gene has been identified . Dr. Terry-Lynn Young of Newfoundland and her team of researchers at w: Memorial University of Newfoundland made the discovery after  research of the occurrence of the condition in a number of families   
Revised:  The disease is abnormally high in the w:Canadian Province of w: Newfoundland and Labrador where the gene has been identified . Dr. Terry-Lynn Young and her team of researchers at w: Memorial University of Newfoundland made the discovery after research of the occurrence of the condition in a number of families 
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Original:  The disease is abnormally high in the w:Canadian Province of w: Newfoundland and Labrador where the gene has been identified . Dr. Terry-Lynn Young of Newfoundland and her team of researchers at w: Memorial University of Newfoundland made the discovery after  research of the occurrence of the condition in a number of families   
Revised:  The disease is abnormally high in the w:Canadian Province of w: Newfoundland and Labrador where the gene has been identified . Dr. Terry-Lynn Young of Newfoundland and her team of researchers at the Memorial University of Newfoundland made the discovery after research of the occurrence of the condition in a number of families 
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Original:  He earned 5 points on 5 assists, and assisted in the game winning goal by Trevor Daley .
Revised:  He earned 5 points on 5 assists, and assisted in the game winning goal by Trevor Daley 
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Original:  Vancouver Whitecaps signed former Toronto FC Goalkeeper Srdjan Djekanovic to a one year contract.
Revised:  Vancouver Whitecaps signed former Toronto FC goalkeeper Srdjan Djekanovic to a one year contract.
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Original:  In other transaction, Toronto FC traded Right Winger Ronnie O'Brien to San Jose Earthquakes for a First Round Pick in next year's draft and cash
Revised:  In another transaction, Toronto FC traded Right Winger Ronnie O'Brien to San Jose Earthquakes for a First Round Pick in next year's draft and cash
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Original:  In other transaction, Toronto FC traded Right Winger Ronnie O'Brien to San Jose Earthquakes for a First Round Pick in next year's draft and cash
Revised:  In other transaction, Toronto FC traded right winger Ronnie O'Brien to San Jose Earthquakes for a First Round Pick in next year's draft and cash
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Original: According to  DotAsia Organization, since the Landrush started for global application , approximately 266, 663 applications were submitted to several ISPs on the 1st day of this Landrush.
Revised: According to the DotAsia Organization, since the Landrush started for global application , approximately 266, 663 applications were submitted to several ISPs on the 1st day of this Landrush.
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Original:  Currently , Dotalliance Inc. & EuroDNS S.A. are the top 2 registrars.
Revised:  Currently , Dotalliance Inc. & EuroDNS S.A. are the top two registrars.
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Original: With the ". asia " domain having become notable, many more applications are expected before the closing date of March 12.
Revised: With the ". Asia " domain having become notable, many more applications are expected before the closing date of March 12.
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Original:  External Links Category:Asia Category:Europe Category:World Category:Internet Category:Computing zh:.
Revised:  External links Category:Asia Category:Europe Category:World Category:Internet Category:Computing zh:.
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Original:  Asia " domain having become notable, many more applications are expected before the closing date of March 12.
Revised:  asia " domain having become notable, many more applications are expected before the closing date of March 12.
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Original:  External links Category:Asia Category:Europe Category:World Category:Internet Category:Computing zh:.
Revised:  External Links Category:Asia Category:Europe Category:World Category:Internet Category:Computing zh:.
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Original: publish Category:Asia Category:Europe Category:World Category:Internet Category:Computing zh:.
Revised:  Category:Asia Category:Europe Category:World Category:Internet Category:Computing zh:.
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Original:  It is expected that the the execution will be carried within a month.
Revised:  It is expected that the execution will be carried within a month.
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Original: Image:Detail Ali Hassan al-Majid.jpg| "Chemical Ali" at a hearing in 2004 Iraqi officials say the government has approved the death sentence for  "Chemical Ali," a cousin of Saddam Hussein, who is widely known for his role in poison gas attacks on Kurds in Iraq.
Revised:  "Chemical Ali" at a hearing in 2004 Iraqi officials say the government has approved the death sentence for "Chemical Ali," a cousin of Saddam Hussein, who is widely known for his role in poison gas attacks on Kurds in Iraq.
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Original:  The U.S. military is holding all three officials and says Iraqi authorities have yet to make a request for them to be handed over
Revised:  The United States military is holding all three officials and says Iraqi authorities have yet to make a request for them to be handed over
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Original: Opposition and government negotiators in Kenya resumed talks  Friday, focusing on long-term aspects of the country's crisis.
Revised: Opposition and government negotiators in Kenya resumed talks on Friday, focusing on long-term aspects of the country's crisis.
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Original:  It turned out to be    ricin, an extremely dangerous biological agent  derived from castor beans which is used in cancer research and has no other legitimate use.
Revised:  It turned out to be ricin, an extremely dangerous biological agent . derived from castor beans which is used in cancer research and has no other legitimate use.
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Original: Initial tests, which further tests confirmed on Friday, the substance was the deadly toxin ricin, an extremely dangerous biological agent. derived from castor beans which is used in cancer research and has no other legitimate use .
Revised: Initial tests, which further tests confirmed on Friday, the substance was the deadly toxin ricin, an extremely dangerous biological agent. Ricin is extracted from castor beans which is used in cancer research and has no other legitimate use .
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Original: The chemical structure of ricin On February 14, a man staying at the Valley View Extended Stay America hotel in Las Vegas, Nevada was hospitalized after experiencing respitory distress.
Revised: The chemical structure of ricin On February 14, a man staying at the Valley View Extended Stay America hotel in Las Vegas, Nevada was hospitalized after experiencing respiratory distress.
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Original:  The man lapsed into unconciousness and has been at the hospital ever since.
Revised:  The man lapsed into unconsciousness and has been at the hospital ever since.
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Original:  It is currently being used in cancer treatement research.
Revised:  It is currently being used in cancer treatment research.
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Original:  They are all reported to show no signs of infection .
Revised:  They are all reported to show no signs of poisoning .
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Original:  They say that the bank "in attempting to shoot the messenger has only succeeded, spectacularly, in shooting itself.  & 
Revised:  They say that the bank "in attempting to shoot the messenger has only succeeded, spectacularly, in shooting itself. " & 
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Original:  They say that the bank "in attempting to shoot the messenger has only succeeded, spectacularly, in shooting itself.  & 
Revised:  They say that the bank "in attempting to shoot the messenger has only succeeded, spectacularly, in shooting itself. & Trus
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Original:  The case was regarding hundreds of documents allegedly obtained from a whistleblower of the ank Julius Baer & Trus
Revised:  The case was regarding hundreds of documents allegedly obtained from a whistleblower of the Bank Julius Baer & Trus
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Original:  The case was regarding hundreds of documents allegedly obtained from a whistleblower of the Bank Julius Baer & Trus
Revised:  The case was regarding hundreds of documents allegedly obtained from a whistleblower of the Bank Julius Baer & Trust
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Original:  The case was regarding hundreds of documents allegedly obtained from a whistleblower of the Bank Julius Baer & Trust
Revised:  The case was regarding several documents allegedly obtained from a whistleblower of the Bank Julius Baer & Trust
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Original:  (It can still be accessed at 88.80.13.160/wiki/wikileaks ) The Facebook user who became involved in the court case has responded to this by saying that "I am an officer of a Facebook group, which is essentially a message board for discussion of issues relating to Wikileaks.
Revised:  (It could still be accessed at 88.80.13.160/wiki/wikileaks ) The Facebook user who became involved in the court case has responded to this by saying that "I am an officer of a Facebook group, which is essentially a message board for discussion of issues relating to Wikileaks.
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Original:  (It could still be accessed via its IP address at URL or one of its alternative DNS entries) The Facebook user who became involved in the court case has responded to this by saying that "I am an officer of a Facebook group, which is essentially a message board for discussion of issues relating to Wikileaks.
Revised:  As of this writing, Wikileaks could still be accessed via its IP address at URL or one of its alternative DNS entries) The Facebook user who became involved in the court case has responded to this by saying that "I am an officer of a Facebook group, which is essentially a message board for discussion of issues relating to Wikileaks.
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Original:  (It could still be accessed via its IP address at URL or one of its alternative DNS entries) The Facebook user who became involved in the court case has responded to this by saying that "I am an officer of a Facebook group, which is essentially a message board for discussion of issues relating to Wikileaks.
Revised:  (It could still be accessed via its IP address at URL The Facebook user who became involved in the court case has responded to this by saying that "I am an officer of a Facebook group, which is essentially a message board for discussion of issues relating to Wikileaks.
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Original:  but soon, the products of this tax came, as any other tax, into the government's general fund  
Revised:  but soon, the products of this tax came, as any other tax, into the government's general fund . 
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Original:  SNCF considered the day as a holiday for payroll purposes, and instead increased the work day by 1'52", a measured that majority leader Nicolas Sarkozy considered shocking and contrary to the objectives of the government  
Revised:  SNCF considered the day as a holiday for payroll purposes, and instead increased the work day by 1'52", a measured that majority leader Nicolas Sarkozy considered shocking and contrary to the objectives of the government . 
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Original: The government will raise 2 ×109 € (€20bn) with this measure, which will be donated to a new public establishment, the "national fund for solidarity for autonomy", chartered to deal with losses of self-sufficiency of elderly or handicapped people.
Revised: The government will raise 2 billion € (€20bn) with this measure, which will be donated to a new public establishment, the "national fund for solidarity for autonomy", chartered to deal with losses of self-sufficiency of elderly or handicapped people.
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Original: The government will raise 2 ×109 € (€20bn) with this measure, which will be donated to a new public establishment, the "national fund for solidarity for autonomy", chartered to deal with losses of self-sufficiency of elderly or handicapped people.
Revised: The government will raise 2 ×109 € with this measure, which will be donated to a new public establishment, the "national fund for solidarity for autonomy", chartered to deal with losses of self-sufficiency of elderly or handicapped people.
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Original:  1.2 ×109 € (€12bn) are earmarked for elderly people, 0.8 ×109€ (€8bn) for the handicapped.
Revised:  1.2 billion € (€12bn) are earmarked for elderly people, 0.8 ×109€ (€8bn) for the handicapped.
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Original:  1.2 ×109 € (€12bn) are earmarked for elderly people, 0.8 ×109€ (€8bn) for the handicapped.
Revised:  1.2 ×109 € are earmarked for elderly people, 0.8 ×109€ (€8bn) for the handicapped.
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Original:  1.2 ×109 € (€12bn) are earmarked for elderly people, 0.8 ×109€ (€8bn) for the handicapped.
Revised:  1.2 ×109 € (€12bn) are earmarked for elderly people, 0.8 for the handicapped.
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Original:  some in defiance of the government's decision ;
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Original:  However, the reception of his new working day , which the administration says promotes solidarity with the elderly , was mixed . Trade unions and opposition groups argue that the measure is an ill-conceived stunt aimed at hiding the government's bad handling of the problems of the elderly.
Revised:  However, the reception of this new working day , which the administration says promotes solidarity with the elderly , was mixed . Trade unions and opposition groups argue that the measure is an ill-conceived stunt aimed at hiding the government's bad handling of the problems of the elderly.
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Original:  However, the reception of his new working day , which the administration says promotes solidarity with the elderly , was mixed . Trade unions and opposition groups argue that the measure is an ill-conceived stunt aimed at hiding the government's bad handling of the problems of the elderly.
Revised:  However, the reception of his new working day was mixed. The administration says it promotes solidarity with the elderly , was mixed . Trade unions and opposition groups argue that the measure is an ill-conceived stunt aimed at hiding the government's bad handling of the problems of the elderly.
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Original:  However, the reception of his new working day , which the administration says promotes solidarity with the elderly , was mixed . Trade unions and opposition groups argue that the measure is an ill-conceived stunt aimed at hiding the government's bad handling of the problems of the elderly.
Revised:  However, the reception of his new working day , which the administration says promotes solidarity with the elderly . Trade unions and opposition groups argue that the measure is an ill-conceived stunt aimed at hiding the government's bad handling of the problems of the elderly.
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Original:  The government will raise 2 billion € with this measure, which will be donated to a new public establishment, the "national fund for solidarity for autonomy  " , chartered to deal with losses of self-sufficiency of elderly or handicapped people.
Revised:  With this measure, the French government will raise 2 billion € with this measure, which will be donated to a new public establishment, the "national fund for solidarity for autonomy " , chartered to deal with losses of self-sufficiency of elderly or handicapped people.
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