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Original:  The authors justified the introduction of the term: See also Blinded experiment Design of experiments Randomized experiment Metascience Sealedenvelope.com -- a provider of allocation concealment services
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Original: In a randomized experiment, an allocation concealment strategy hides the method of sorting trial participants into treatment groups so that this knowledge cannot be exploited.
Revised: In a randomized experiment, allocation concealment hides the sorting of trial participants into treatment groups so that this knowledge cannot be exploited.
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Original:  Adequate allocation concealment serves to prevent study participants from choosing treatment allocations for subjects.
Revised:  Adequate allocation concealment serves to prevent study participants from influencing treatment allocations for subjects.
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Original:  History Before  the use of allocation concealment, it was common for researchers to place subjects expected to have good outcomes in the treatment group, and those expected to have poor outcomes in the control group.
Revised:  History Impact the use of allocation concealment, it was common for researchers to place subjects expected to have good outcomes in the treatment group, and those expected to have poor outcomes in the control group.
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Original:  History Before  the use of allocation concealment, it was common for researchers to place subjects expected to have good outcomes in the treatment group, and those expected to have poor outcomes in the control group.
Revised:  History Before the use of allocation concealment, researchers may (consciously or unconsciously) place subjects expected to have good outcomes in the treatment group, and those expected to have poor outcomes in the control group.
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Original:  The term 'allocation concealment' was first introduced by Shultz . et al.
Revised:  The term 'allocation concealment' was first introduced by Shultz et al.
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Original:  She was Queensland's first female funeral director, with the business being named in her honour, K. M. Smith Funeral Directors.
Revised:  She was Queensland's first female funeral director, with her business being called K. M. Smith Funeral Directors.
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Original:  Born Catherine Mary Farrell, Kate immigrated to Australia in the 1860s and married John Smith, who had began making coffins due to his cabinet making and carpentry skills  . After John passed away in 1886, Kate ran the business with the assistance of her eldest son  John.
Revised:  Born Catherine Mary Farrell, Kate immigrated to Australia in the 1860s and married John Smith, who had using his cabinet-making and carpentry skills . After John passed away in 1886, Kate ran the business with the assistance of her eldest son John.
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Original:  Born Catherine Mary Farrell, Kate immigrated to Australia in the 1860s and married John Smith, who had began making coffins due to his cabinet making and carpentry skills  . After John passed away in 1886, Kate ran the business with the assistance of her eldest son  John.
Revised:  Born Catherine Mary Farrell, Kate immigrated to Australia in the 1860s and married John Smith, who had began making coffins due to his cabinet making and carpentry skills to make coffins . After John passed away in 1886, Kate ran the business with the assistance of her eldest son John.
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Original:  Born Catherine Mary Farrell, Kate immigrated to Australia in the 1860s and married John Smith, who had began making coffins due to his cabinet making and carpentry skills  . After John passed away in 1886, Kate ran the business with the assistance of her eldest son  John.
Revised:  Born Catherine Mary Farrell, Kate immigrated to Australia in the 1860s and married John Smith, who had began making coffins due to his cabinet making and carpentry skills . After John died in 1886, Kate ran the business with the assistance of her eldest son John.
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Original:  Born Catherine Mary Farrell, Kate immigrated to Australia in the 1860s and married John Smith, who had began making coffins due to his cabinet making and carpentry skills  . After John passed away in 1886, Kate ran the business with the assistance of her eldest son  John.
Revised:  Born Catherine Mary Farrell, Kate immigrated to Australia in the 1860s and married John Smith, who had began making coffins due to his cabinet making and carpentry skills . After John passed away in 1886, Kate ran the business with the assistance of her eldest son , also called John.
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Original:  Mary closely monitored all aspects of the business , including embalming . Kate Mary Smith was inducted into  Queensland Business Leaders Hall of Fame in 2010.
Revised:  Mary closely monitored all aspects of the business . Kate Mary Smith was inducted into Queensland Business Leaders Hall of Fame in 2010.
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Original:  Mary closely monitored all aspects of the business , including embalming . Kate Mary Smith was inducted into  Queensland Business Leaders Hall of Fame in 2010.
Revised:  Mary closely monitored all aspects of the business , including embalming . Smith was inducted into Queensland Business Leaders Hall of Fame in 2010.
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Original:  Mary closely monitored all aspects of the business , including embalming . Kate Mary Smith was inducted into  Queensland Business Leaders Hall of Fame in 2010.
Revised:  Mary closely monitored all aspects of the business , including embalming . Kate Mary Smith was inducted into the Queensland Business Leaders Hall of Fame in 2010.
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Original: Kate Mary Smith (1847-1932) was a business woman from Brisbane, Queensland.
Revised: Kate Mary Smith (1847-1932) was a businesswoman from Brisbane, Queensland.
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Original:  Mary closely monitored all aspects of the business.
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Original: His next film Style ( 2016 film) was a success at the box-office.
Revised: His next film , Style, came in 2016 film) was a success at the box-office.
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Original: His next film Style ( 2016 film) was a success at the box-office.
Revised: His next film Style ( 2016 and was a success at the box-office.
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Original:  Style (2016 film), although it took close to two years in the making,  marked a turning point in his career as director.
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Original:  Style (2016 film), although it took close to two years in the making,  marked a turning point in his career as director.
Revised:  Style (2016 film), although it took close to two years in the making, Style marked a turning point in his career as director.
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Original:   Style is not Ithihasa.
Revised:  Binu stated: " Style is not Ithihasa.
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Original:  Style (2016 film) on theother hand is a normal film.
Revised:  Style on the other hand is a normal film.
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Original:  Therefore, there isn’t any story behind the objects. 
Revised:  Therefore, there isn’t any story behind the objects. "
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Original:  Jeethu gained popularity after the release of Ithihasa, produced by Rajesh Augustine.
Revised:  Binu gained popularity after the release of Ithihasa, produced by Rajesh Augustine.
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Original: Binu made his directional debut with the 2014 film Ithihasa and later went on to direct his second film : Style (2016 film) (2016).
Revised: Binu made his directional debut with the 2014 film Ithihasa and later went on to direct his second film Style (2016).
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Original: Binu made his directional debut with the 2014 film Ithihasaand later went on to direct his second film Style (2016) .
Revised: Binu gained popularity with his directional debut with the 2014 film Ithihasaand later went on to direct his second film Style (2016) .
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Original: He was scheduled to be executed on June 8, 2006, but the governor of Virginia, Tim Kaine, stayed the execution one hour before it was due to take place and has ordered a mental examination of the convict to determine if he is fit for execution or not.
Revised: He was scheduled to be executed on June 8, 2006, but the governor of Virginia, Tim Kaine, stayed the execution one hour before it was due to take place and ordered a mental examination of the convict to determine if he is fit for execution or not.
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Original:  His reputation evolved among the pious, as was common for early Christian saints, and his legendary habit of secret gift-giving gave rise to the traditional model of Santa Claus ("Saint Nick") through Sinterklaas  .
Revised:  His reputation evolved among the pious, as was common for early Christian saints, and his legendary habit of secret gift-giving gave rise to the traditional acts of Santa Claus ("Saint Nick") through Sinterklaas .
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Original:  His reputation evolved among the pious, as was common for early Christian saints, and his legendary habit of secret gift-giving gave rise to the traditional acts of Santa Claus ("Saint Nick") through Sinterklaas with help from various counterparts considered to be elves .
Revised:  His reputation evolved among the pious, as was common for early Christian saints, and his legendary habit of secret gift-giving gave rise to the traditional model of Santa Claus ("Saint Nick") through Sinterklaas with help from various counterparts considered to be elves .
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Original:  His reputation evolved among the pious, as was common for early Christian saints, and his legendary habit of secret gift-giving gave rise to the traditional acts of Santa Claus ("Saint Nick") through Sinterklaas with help from various counterparts considered to be elves .
Revised:  His reputation evolved among the pious, as was common for early Christian saints, and his legendary habit of secret gift-giving gave rise to the traditional acts of Santa Claus ("Saint Nick") through Sinterklaas .
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Original: Generosity and travels The dowry for the three virgins (Gentile da Fabriano, 1425, Pinacoteca Vaticana, Rome) After his parents died, Nicholas is said to have distributed their wealth to the poor.
Revised:  After his parents died, Nicholas is said to have distributed their wealth to the poor.
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Original: Family and background Accounts of Saint Nicholas's life agree on the essence of his story, but modern historians disagree regarding how much of this story is actually rooted in historical fact.
Revised: Hi Accounts of Saint Nicholas's life agree on the essence of his story, but modern historians disagree regarding how much of this story is actually rooted in historical fact.
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Original:  Saint Nicholas is the patron saint of sailors, merchants, archers, repentant thieves, prostitutes, children, brewers, pawnbrokers, unmarried people, and students in various cities and countries around Europe.
Revised:  Saint Nicholas is the patron saint of sailors, merchants, archers, repentant thieves, children, brewers, pawnbrokers, unmarried people, and students in various cities and countries around Europe.
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Original:  They have sung backup for musicians like Felix Bell and G Man and made appearances on Mr Picus Laryea's shows in the 1970's   .
Revised:  They sang backup for musicians like Felix Bell and G Man and made appearances on Mr Picus Laryea's shows in the 1970's .
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Original: Early life Lydia Dedei Yawson Nee Tagoe and Elizabeth Korkoi Tagoe, who are twins, were born to the late Hammond Ayikwei Tagoe and Madam Theresa Aidoo on July 27, 1965.
Revised: Early life Lydia Dedei Yawson (née Tagoe) and Elizabeth Korkoi Tagoe, who are twins, were born to the late Hammond Ayikwei Tagoe and Madam Theresa Aidoo on July 27, 1965.
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Original: Early life Lydia Dedei Yawson (née Tagoe) and Elizabeth Korkoi Tagoe, who are twins, were born to the late Hammond Ayikwei Tagoe and Madam Theresa Aidoo on July 27 , 1965.
Revised: Early life Lydia Dedei Yawson (née Tagoe) and Elizabeth Korkoi Tagoe, who are twins, were born to the late Hammond Ayikwei Tagoe and Madam Theresa Aidoo on 27 , 1965.
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Original:  born November 16, 1999) is a Sudanese-born American professional basketball player for the Denver Nuggets of the National Basketball Association (NBA).
Revised:  born November 16, 1999) is an American professional basketball player for the Denver Nuggets of the National Basketball Association (NBA).
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Original: Professional career Denver Nuggets (2019–present) 2019–20 season Bol was drafted with the 44th pick of the 2019 NBA draft by the Miami Heat.
Revised: Professional career 2019–20 season Bol was drafted with the 44th pick of the 2019 NBA draft by the Miami Heat.
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Original: Professional career Denver Nuggets (2019–present) 2019–20 season Bol was drafted with the 44th pick of the 2019 NBA draft by the Miami Heat.
Revised: Professional career Denver Nuggets (2019–present) Bol was drafted with the 44th pick of the 2019 NBA draft by the Miami Heat.
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Original:  2020–21 season Bol eventually made his NBA debut in the 2020 NBA Bubble on August 1, 2020, recording 5 points and 4 rebounds under 11 minutes of play in a 125–105 loss to the Miami Heat.
Revised:  Bol Bol eventually made his NBA debut in the 2020 NBA Bubble on August 1, 2020, recording 5 points and 4 rebounds under 11 minutes of play in a 125–105 loss to the Miami Heat.
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Original:  A son of basketball player Manute Bol (who was known for being  the tallest NBA player in history), Bol was born in Khartoum, Sudan, but began living in Olathe, Kansas from a young age.
Revised:  A son of basketball player Manute Bol (who was known for being one of the tallest NBA player in history), Bol was born in Khartoum, Sudan, but began living in Olathe, Kansas from a young age.
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Original:  A son of basketball player Manute Bol (who was known for being  the tallest NBA player in history), Bol was born in Khartoum, Sudan, but began living in Olathe, Kansas from a young age.
Revised:  A son of basketball player Manute Bol (who was known for being the tallest NBA players in history), Bol was born in Khartoum, Sudan, but began living in Olathe, Kansas from a young age.
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Original:  born November 16, 1999) is a South Sudanese-American professional basketball player for the Denver Nuggets of the National Basketball Association (NBA).
Revised:  born November 16, 1999) is an American professional basketball player for the Denver Nuggets of the National Basketball Association (NBA).
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Original: Early life Bol was born on November 16, 1999, in Khartoum, Sudan, as the second child of former National Basketball Association (NBA) star Manute Bol and his wife Ajok Kuag .
Revised: Early life Bol was born on November 16, 1999, in Khartoum, Sudan, as the second child of former National Basketball Association (NBA) star Chicken Bol and his wife Ajok Kuag .
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Original:  Every years, there are over 60 thousands of child labour who employment at approximately 800 factories of brick in Nepal, Their family and they who live in polluted factory and works for 12 to 16 hours per day, every months salary is about 35,000 Nepalese Rupee (465.60 SGD or 341.50 USD) in order to maintain for survive.
Revised:  Every years, there are approximately 60 thousands of child labour who employment at approximately 800 factories of brick in Nepal, Their family and they who live in polluted factory and works for 12 to 16 hours per day, every months salary is about 35,000 Nepalese Rupee (465.60 SGD or 341.50 USD) in order to maintain for survive.
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Original:  Every years, there are over 60 thousands of child labour who employment at approximately 800 factories of brick in Nepal, Their family and they who live in polluted factory and works for 12 to 16 hours per day, every months salary is about 35,000 Nepalese Rupee (465.60 SGD or 341.50 USD) in order to maintain for survive.
Revised:  Every years, there are over 60 thousands of child labour who employment at about 800 factories of brick in Nepal, Their family and they who live in polluted factory and works for 12 to 16 hours per day, every months salary is about 35,000 Nepalese Rupee (465.60 SGD or 341.50 USD) in order to maintain for survive.
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Original:  Every years, there are over 60 thousands of child labour who employment at approximately 800 factories of brick in Nepal, Their family and they who live in polluted factory and works for 12 to 16 hours per day, every months salary is about 35,000 Nepalese Rupee (465.60 SGD or 341.50 USD) in order to maintain for survive.
Revised:  Every years, there are over 60 thousands of child labour who employment at approximately 800 brick factories in Nepal, Their family and they who live in polluted factory and works for 12 to 16 hours per day, every months salary is about 35,000 Nepalese Rupee (465.60 SGD or 341.50 USD) in order to maintain for survive.
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Original:  Two 10 years-old child labour named Linh and Hao, who live in a village nearby Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam, their employment salary was lower than 3 SGD (2.20 USD) per day, Linh's family was force to move house while Hao remained to work for survive.
Revised:  Two 10 years-old child labour named Linh and Hao, who live in a village nearby Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam, their employment salary was lower than 3 SGD (2.20 USD) per day, Linh's family was forced to move house while Hao remained to work for survive.
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Original:  He employment in dark, dusty and noisy factory for manufacturing the aluminium pots, he only coated with metallic dust and operating an heavy machinery without wearing any safety gears for his works.
Revised:  He employment in dark, dusty and noisy factory for manufacturing the aluminium pots, he only coated with metallic dust and operating a heavy machinery without wearing any safety gears for his works.
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Original:  A 14 years-old child labour named Kroch Kreit (KK) live in Cambodia, he and other children labour who employment as boat driving on circumstances, they use forced muscle to engage an hard works for exchanging their meager wage to in order for survive.
Revised:  A 14 years-old child labour named Kroch Kreit (KK) live in Cambodia, he and other children labour who employment as boat driving on circumstances, they use forced muscle to engage a hard works for exchanging their meager wage to in order for survive.
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Original: Early Life and the beginnings of a successful brewery Robert Portner was born in Westphalia, Prussia in 1837 and immigrated to the United States in 1853.
Revised: Early life and the beginnings of a successful brewery Robert Portner was born in Westphalia, Prussia in 1837 and immigrated to the United States in 1853.
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Original:  Based in Alexandria, Virginia, Portner found success after the war with the  Portner Brewing Company.
Revised:  Based in Alexandria, Virginia, Portner found success after the war with the Robert Portner Brewing Company.
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Original:  Portner 's patented a system to chill lager as well as a machine used to make ice . Early life Robert Portner was born in Westphalia , Prussia in 1837 and immigrated to the United States in 1853.
Revised:  Portner 's patented a system to chill lager as well as a machine used to make ice . Early life Robert Portner was born in Westphalia , 1837 and immigrated to the United States in 1853.
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Original:  Portner spent eight years in New York and tried his hand at many professions, including liquor store owner . Portner traveled south to Virginia in 1861 and bought a grocery store with his friend Frederick Recker .
Revised:  Portner spent eight years in New York and tried his hand at many professions, including liquor store owner . Portner traveled south to AlexandriaAlexandria, Virginia, VirginiaVirginia (U.S. state) where he bought a grocery store with his friend Frederick Recker .
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Original:  Portner and Company began brewing and supplying beer to Union soldiers positioned in Alexandria and parts of the South . Portner Brewing Company After the war, Portner and Company dissolved.
Revised:  Portner and Company , where they brewed their own beer to sell to the troops . Portner Brewing Company After the war, Portner and Company dissolved.
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Original:  Portner and Company began brewing and supplying beer to Union soldiers positioned in Alexandria and parts of the South . Portner Brewing Company After the war, Portner and Company dissolved.
Revised:  Portner and Company began brewing and supplying beer to Union soldiers positioned in Alexandria and parts of the South . Robert Portner, Brewer After the war, Portner and Company dissolved.
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Original:  Portner learned to brew after the war and eventually brewed enough to require storage cellars.
Revised:  Portner learned the brewing process and eventually brewed enough to require storage cellars.
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Original:  The Brewing Company continued to grow and Portner was able to pay off his debts.
Revised:  The brewery continued to grow and Portner was able to pay off his debts.
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Original:  With his successes, Portner further expanded his company to include beer gardens  &  &       .
Revised:  With his successes, Portner further expanded his company to include beer gardens . & & .
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Original:  With his successes, Portner further expanded his company to include beer gardens  &  &       .
Revised:  With his successes, Portner further expanded his company to include beer gardens & & Death Throughout his life, Portner suffered from weak nerves and rheumatism. As the stress of his businesses mounted, as well as combating the ever-growing anti-saloon sentiment throughout the country, Portner found himself gradually weaker and in ill health. He took multiple trips to Europe to recuperate, which helped to a degree, but nothing permanently cured him. By 1903 he had all but formally retired from active business activities and was living full-time at Annaburg. It was here, surrounded by his family, that he died on May 29, 1906. He was buried in the Manassas Cemetery .
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Original: Early life Robert Portner was born in RahdenRahden , Westphalia, PrussiaPrussia on March 20, 1837 and immigrated to the United States in 1853.
Revised: Early life Robert Portner was born in Rahden , Westphalia, PrussiaPrussia on March 20, 1837 and immigrated to the United States in 1853.
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Original: Early life Robert Portner was born in RahdenRahden , Westphalia, PrussiaPrussia on March 20, 1837 and immigrated to the United States in 1853.
Revised: Early life Robert Portner was born in RahdenRahden , Westphalia, Prussia on March 20, 1837 and immigrated to the United States in 1853.
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Original:  He traveled south to AlexandriaAlexandria , Virginia, VirginiaVirginia (U.S. state) where he bought a grocery store with his friend Frederick Recker and the two men found success selling food and supplies to Union soldiers stationed in the area.
Revised:  He traveled south to Alexandria , Virginia, VirginiaVirginia (U.S. state) where he bought a grocery store with his friend Frederick Recker and the two men found success selling food and supplies to Union soldiers stationed in the area.
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