wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Maxie is eventually subdued by Batman with help from "Clio  " . While being dragged through Arkham Asylum, Maxie sees the prisoners as a different Greek deity: most notably Joker as the trickster god Hermes, Two-Face as the "double-faced" Roman god Janus, and Poison Ivy as the goddess Demeter.
Revised:  Maxie is eventually subdued by Batman with help from "Clio 's " . While being dragged through Arkham Asylum, Maxie sees the prisoners as a different Greek deity: most notably Joker as the trickster god Hermes, Two-Face as the "double-faced" Roman god Janus, and Poison Ivy as the goddess Demeter.
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Original:  In the episode "Thunder", Maxie is an eccentric multi-millionaire and owner of Zeus Industries who is obsessed with Greek mythology.
Revised:  Introduced in the episode "Thunder", Maxie is an eccentric multi-millionaire and owner of Zeus Industries who is obsessed with Greek mythology.
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Original:  Angered by his defeat, Maxie rides in his airshipNew Olympus in order to make Gotham City his own personal kingdom, but he is foiled by Batman and Batgirl with New Olympus crashing into the harbor.
Revised:  Angered by his defeat, Maxie rides in his airshipNew Olympus in order to make Gotham City his own personal kingdom, only to be foiled by Batman and Batgirl with New Olympus crashing into the harbor.
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Original:  In the episode "Rumors" , Maxie reappears as one of the many villains captured by the villain Rumor.
Revised:  In the episode "Rumors" as one of the many villains captured by the villain Rumor.
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Original:  In the episode "Rumors" , Maxie reappears as one of the many villains captured by the villain Rumor.
Revised:  In the episode "Rumors" , Maxie reappears as one of several supervillains who were captured by the villain Rumor.
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Original:  This version has a job as a self-help guru for aspiring supervillains and mentions he stole the medals for the 1996 Summer Olympics  .
Revised:  This version has a job as a self-help guru for aspiring supervillains , most notably stole the medals for the 1996 Summer Olympics .
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Original:  In the episode "So You Need A Crew?", when Harley Quinn comes to him for help in becoming her own supervillain,  Maxie reveals his sexist nature and requests sexual favors from her in exchange.
Revised:  In the episode "So You Need A Crew?", Harley Quinn comes to him for help in becoming her own supervillain, Maxie reveals his sexist nature and requests sexual favors from her in exchange.
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Original:  In the episode "So You Need A Crew?", when Harley Quinn comes to him for help in becoming her own supervillain,  Maxie reveals his sexist nature and requests sexual favors from her in exchange.
Revised:  In the episode "So You Need A Crew?", when Harley Quinn comes to him for help in becoming her own supervillain, but Maxie reveals his sexist nature and requests sexual favors from her in exchange.
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Original:  Insulted, Harley teams up with Clayface and Doctor Psycho to get payback with the former disguising himself as Maxie's illegitimate son to distract him while she and the latter rob his mansion . Maxie eventually sees through Clayface's ruse and savagely beats him, but he is in turn beaten by Harley and Doctor Psycho.
Revised:  Insulted, Harley teams up with Clayface and Doctor Psycho to get payback . The former disguises himself as Maxie's illegitimate son to distract him while she and the latter rob his mansion . Maxie eventually sees through Clayface's ruse and savagely beats him, but he is in turn beaten by Harley and Doctor Psycho.
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Original:  Insulted, Harley teams up with Clayface and Doctor Psycho to get payback with the former disguising himself as Maxie's illegitimate son to distract him while she and the latter rob his mansion . Maxie eventually sees through Clayface's ruse and savagely beats him, but he is in turn beaten by Harley and Doctor Psycho.
Revised:  Insulted, Harley teams up with Clayface and Doctor Psycho to get payback with the former disguising himself as Maxie's illegitimate son while his allies rob his mansion . Maxie eventually sees through Clayface's ruse and savagely beats him, but he is in turn beaten by Harley and Doctor Psycho.
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Original:  Insulted, Harley teams up with Clayface and Doctor Psycho to get payback with the former disguising himself as Maxie's illegitimate son to distract him while she and the latter rob his mansion . Maxie eventually sees through Clayface's ruse and savagely beats him, but he is in turn beaten by Harley and Doctor Psycho.
Revised:  Insulted, Harley teams up with Clayface and Doctor Psycho to get payback with the former disguising himself as Maxie's illegitimate son to distract him while she and the latter rob his mansion , but Maxie sees through the disguise and beats Clayface until he in turn beaten by Harley and Doctor Psycho.
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Original:  Maxie is later interviewed by reporters and reluctantly admits Harley is a powerful supervillain.
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Original:  In the episode "L.O.D.R.S.V.P.", a portrait of him is seen in the Hall of Doom at the time when Harley's crew meets up with Lex Luthor indicating that Maxie Zeus is a member of the Legion of Doom.
Revised:  In the episode "L.O.D.R.S.V.P.", a portrait of Maxie appears in the Hall of Doom at the time when Harley's crew meets up with Lex Luthor indicating that Maxie Zeus is a member of the Legion of Doom.
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Original:  In the episode "L.O.D.R.S.V.P.", a portrait of him is seen in the Hall of Doom at the time when Harley's crew meets up with Lex Luthor indicating that Maxie Zeus is a member of the Legion of Doom.
Revised:  In the episode "L.O.D.R.S.V.P.", a portrait of him is seen in the Hall of Doom , indicating that he is a member of the Legion of Doom.
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Original:  In the season two finale " The Runaway Bridesmaid ", he attends Poison Ivy and Kite Man's wedding alongside Nora and takes part in a war between  other attending supervillains and the GCPD , displaying the ability to fire lightning from his hands.
Revised:  In the episode " The Runaway Bridesmaid ", he attends Poison Ivy and Kite Man's wedding alongside Nora and takes part in a war between other attending supervillains and the GCPD , displaying the ability to fire lightning from his hands.
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Original:  In the season two finale " The Runaway Bridesmaid ", he attends Poison Ivy and Kite Man's wedding alongside Nora and takes part in a war between  other attending supervillains and the GCPD , displaying the ability to fire lightning from his hands.
Revised:  In the season two finale " The Runaway Bridesmaid ", he attends Poison Ivy and Kite Man's wedding and takes part in a war between other attending supervillains and the GCPD , displaying the ability to fire lightning from his hands.
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Original:  In the season two finale " The Runaway Bridesmaid ", he attends Poison Ivy and Kite Man's wedding alongside Nora and takes part in a war between  other attending supervillains and the GCPD , displaying the ability to fire lightning from his hands.
Revised:  In the season two finale " The Runaway Bridesmaid ", he attends Poison Ivy and Kite Man's wedding alongside Nora and takes part in a war between the other attending supervillains and the GCPD , displaying the ability to fire lightning from his hands.
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Original:  Film Though Maxie Zeus does not appear in Batman: Assault on Arkham, a box with his tools is found by King Shark along with Firefly's tools and Killer Moth's tools.
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Original:  The character is depicted as a mentally ill former history professor who is obsessed with Greek mythology and believes  to be the god Zeus, becoming a crime lord in Gotham City.
Revised:  The character is depicted as a mentally ill former history professor who is obsessed with Greek mythology and believes himself to be the god Zeus, becoming a crime lord in Gotham City.
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Original:  However, their scheme was foiled by Wonder Woman, Batman and their allies, and Ares himself banished his children back to Tartarus.
Revised:  Their scheme was foiled by Wonder Woman, Batman and their allies, and Ares himself banished his children back to Tartarus.
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Original:  However, it is revealed that this is a simulation created by Batman to train Robin.
Revised:  This was revealed to be a simulation created by Batman to train Robin.
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Original:  This version has a job as a self-help guru for aspiring supervillains, most notably stole the medals for the 1996 Summer Olympics, and can generate lightning from his hands.
Revised:  This version has a job as a self-help guru for aspiring supervillains, most notably stealing the medals for the 1996 Summer Olympics, and can generate lightning from his hands.
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Original:  In the episode "L.O.D.R.S.V.P.", a portrait of Maxie appears in the Hall of Doom, indicating that he is a member of the Legion of Doom.
Revised:  In "L.O.D.R.S.V.P.", a portrait of Maxie appears in the Hall of Doom, indicating that he is a member of the Legion of Doom.
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Original:  In the episode "Bachelorette", he works as an employee at a strip club on an island near Themyscira and enters a relationship with the widowed Nora Fries.
Revised:  In "Bachelorette", he works as an employee at a strip club on an island near Themyscira and enters a relationship with the widowed Nora Fries.
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Original:  In the episode "Something Borrowed, Something Green", he and Nora attend Poison Ivy and Kite Man's wedding and takes part in a war between the other attending supervillains and the GCPD.
Revised:  In "Something Borrowed, Something Green", he and Nora attend Poison Ivy and Kite Man's wedding and takes part in a war between the other attending supervillains and the GCPD.
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Original:  He was born in a very rich family, because his fatherwas a reporterand established a magazine company .
Revised:  His father, a reporter, had established a magazine company .
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Original: His familyeconomy turns 180 degrees where their big house and cars were sold to cover debt and for a living, they must live in a tiny apartment.
Revised: His familyeconomy turns 180 degrees where their big house and cars to cover debt and for a living, they must live in a tiny apartment.
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Original:  He became the national noble student  in 1984 and 1985.
Revised:  He was named a " national noble student in 1984 and 1985.
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Original:  He became the national noble student  in 1984 and 1985.
Revised:  He became the national noble student " in 1984 and 1985.
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Original:  While studying, he and his two friends started a shop that  sold books and T-shirts then they rapidly became a big shop selling doctors and laboratories equipment.
Revised:  While studying, he and his two friends opened a shop that sold books and T-shirts then they rapidly became a big shop selling doctors and laboratories equipment.
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Original:  While studying, he and his two friends started a shop that  sold books and T-shirts then they rapidly became a big shop selling doctors and laboratories equipment.
Revised:  While studying, he and his two friends started a shop that sold books and T-shirts , and expanded to sell medical equipment.
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Original:  In his spare time he conducted business until he drops-out of the dentistry school and established PT CT Corp with 150 million rupiah of assets borrowed from Exim Bank.
Revised:  In his spare time , Chairul conducted business until he drops-out of the dentistry school and established PT CT Corp with 150 million rupiah of assets borrowed from Exim Bank.
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Original:  In his spare time he conducted business until he drops-out of the dentistry school and established PT CT Corp with 150 million rupiah of assets borrowed from Exim Bank.
Revised:  In his spare time he conducted business until dropping out of dentistry school and established PT CT Corp with 150 million rupiah of assets borrowed from Exim Bank.
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Original:  In his spare time he conducted business until he drops-out of the dentistry school and established PT CT Corp with 150 million rupiah of assets borrowed from Exim Bank.
Revised:  In his spare time he conducted business until he drops-out of the dentistry school and establishing PT CT Corp with 150 million rupiah of assets borrowed from Exim Bank.
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Original:  In his spare time he conducted business until he drops-out of the dentistry school and established PT CT Corp with 150 million rupiah of assets borrowed from Exim Bank.
Revised:  In his spare time he conducted business until he drops-out of the dentistry school and established PT CT Corp with a loan of Rp150 million from Exim Bank.
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Original:  They produced shoes for kids and got an order making 160 pairs of shoes to Italy , but a month after the order, he separated from his two friends because he has a different thinking about business.
Revised:  They produced children's footwear and received an order from Italy for 160 pairs of shoes to Italy , but a month after the order, he separated from his two friends because he has a different thinking about business.
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Original:  They produced shoes for kids and got an order making 160 pairs of shoes to Italy , but a month after the order, he separated from his two friends because he has a different thinking about business.
Revised:  They produced shoes for kids and got an order making 160 pairs of shoes , but a month after the order, he separated from his two friends because he has a different thinking about business.
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Original:  They produced shoes for kids and got an order making 160 pairs of shoes to Italy , but a month after the order, he separated from his two friends because he has a different thinking about business.
Revised:  They produced shoes for kids and got an order making 160 pairs of shoes to Italy , but a month after the order, he separated from his two friends because a disagreement over the business.
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Original:  In a report, the introduction gives a summary about the report contents .
Revised:  In a report, the introduction gives a summary about the report contents 
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Revised:  He had %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Branch Manager.
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Original:  Just before%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% important meetings he appears to be scouting for documents pertaining to the same, he has on certain occasions assigned the time slot for two different client meetings, appears to be%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ill prepared for meetings, keeps inadequate records and misses out on several important communications from superiors.
Revised:  Just before%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% on certain occasions assigned the time slot for two different client meetings, appears to be%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ill prepared for meetings, keeps inadequate records and misses out on several important communications from superiors.
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Original:  Just before%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% important meetings he appears to be scouting for documents pertaining to the same, he has on certain occasions assigned the time slot for two different client meetings, appears to be%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ill prepared for meetings, keeps inadequate records and misses out on several important communications from superiors.
Revised:  Just before%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% important meetings he appears to be scouting for documents pertaining to the same, he has %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ill prepared for meetings, keeps inadequate records and misses out on several important communications from superiors.
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Original:  Just before%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% important meetings he appears to be scouting for documents pertaining to the same, he has on certain occasions assigned the time slot for two different client meetings, appears to be%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ill prepared for meetings, keeps inadequate records and misses out on several important communications from superiors.
Revised:  Just before%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% important meetings he appears to be scouting for documents pertaining to the same, he has on certain occasions assigned the time slot for two different client meetings, appears to be%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% communications from superiors.
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Original:  Just before%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% important meetings he appears to be scouting for documents pertaining to the same, he has on certain occasions assigned the time slot for two different client meetings, appears to be%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ill prepared for meetings, keeps inadequate records and misses out on several important communications from superiors.
Revised:  Just before%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% important meetings he appears to be scouting for documents pertaining to the same, he has on certain occasions assigned the time slot for two different client meetings, appears to be%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ill prepared for meetings, keeps inadequate records and misses out on several important 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% His team comprises largely of young energetic but relatively inexperienced professionals.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  This has prompted Arindam to undertake the report compilation of these subordinates on%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% certain occasions into his own hands.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% certain occasions into his own hands.
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Original:  He believes that it is better to do it himself as it would take him less than 5 minutes to complete the task while explaining and getting them to do%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% would require him to set aside 20-25 minutes.
Revised:  He believes that it is better to do it himself as it would %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% would require him to set aside 20-25 minutes.
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Original:  He seems to%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% believe in the dictum that difficult tasks get easier if they are left for a while.
Revised:  He seems to%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Team meetings stretch at times into over an hour as new points keep getting added and%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% discussed.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% discussed.
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Original:  He looks at the pile of papers on his desk and wonders if the paper work was controlling him instead of him%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% controlling the paperwork .
Revised:  He looks at the pile of %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% controlling the paperwork .
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Original:  ln technical writing, the introduction typically includes one or more standard subsections: abstract or summary, preface, acknowledgments, and foreword.
Revised: The introduction typically describes the scope of the document and gives the brief explanation or summary of the document. It may also explain certain elements that are important to the essay if explanations are not part of the main text. The readers can have an idea about the following text before they actually start reading it. ln technical writing, the introduction typically includes one or more standard subsections: abstract or summary, preface, acknowledgments, and foreword.
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Original: First page, introduction to In Flanders Fields In an essay, article, or book, an introduction (also known as a prolegomenon) is a beginning section which states the purpose and goals of the following writing.
Revised: First page, introduction to In an essay, article, or book, an introduction (also known as a prolegomenon) is a beginning section which states the purpose and goals of the following writing.
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Original:  Due to the higher density of  water (1,030 kg m-3 seawater ) than air (1.2 kg m-3), the force exerted by the same velocity on an organism is 827 times stronger in the water .
Revised:  Due to the higher density of water (1,030 kg m-3 ) than air (1.2 kg m-3), the force exerted by the same velocity on an organism is 827 times stronger in the water .
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Original: JPG|sea water Roles of Water Water forms the ocean, produces the high density fluid environment and greatly affects the oceanic organisms.
Revised: JPG|sea water Roles of water Water forms the ocean, produces the high density fluid environment and greatly affects the oceanic organisms.
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Original:  That's the reason why in the ocean organisms can be that huge like Blue whale and macrophyte .
Revised:  That's the reason why in the ocean organisms can be that huge like the blue whale and macrophytes .
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Original:  To be watery and transparent is a successful way to avoid predation. . Types of Water Flow Water flow can be described as laminar flow and turbulentflow . laminar flow is characterized by smooth motion: neighboring particles advected by such a flow will follow similar paths. turbulent flow is dominated by re-circulation, whorls, eddies and apparent randomness.
Revised:  To be watery and transparent is a successful way to avoid predation. Types of Water Flow Water flow can be described as laminar flow and turbulentflow . laminar flow is characterized by smooth motion: neighboring particles advected by such a flow will follow similar paths. turbulent flow is dominated by re-circulation, whorls, eddies and apparent randomness.
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Original:  To be watery and transparent is a successful way to avoid predation. . Types of Water Flow Water flow can be described as laminar flow and turbulentflow . laminar flow is characterized by smooth motion: neighboring particles advected by such a flow will follow similar paths. turbulent flow is dominated by re-circulation, whorls, eddies and apparent randomness.
Revised:  To be watery and transparent is a successful way to avoid predation. . Types of water flow Water flow can be described as laminar flow and turbulentflow . laminar flow is characterized by smooth motion: neighboring particles advected by such a flow will follow similar paths. turbulent flow is dominated by re-circulation, whorls, eddies and apparent randomness.
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Original:  To be watery and transparent is a successful way to avoid predation. . Types of Water Flow Water flow can be described as laminar flow and turbulentflow . laminar flow is characterized by smooth motion: neighboring particles advected by such a flow will follow similar paths. turbulent flow is dominated by re-circulation, whorls, eddies and apparent randomness.
Revised:  To be watery and transparent is a successful way to avoid predation. . Types of Water Flow Water flow can be described as laminar or turbulent . laminar flow is characterized by smooth motion: neighboring particles advected by such a flow will follow similar paths. turbulent flow is dominated by re-circulation, whorls, eddies and apparent randomness.
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Original:  Note : laminar flow does not actually exist.
Revised:  Note that laminar flow does not actually exist.
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Original:  Note : laminar flow does not actually exist.
Revised:  Note : laminar flow does not really exist.
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