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Original: "And it's known for example that it regulates blood pressure and heart rates so your heart rate goes up but it hasn't been known that it actually can affect immune cells as well .
Revised: "And it's known for example that it regulates blood pressure and heart rates so your heart rate goes up but it hasn't been known that it actually can affect immune cells as well ,
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Original:  he said . "Most of us expect to come down with a cold or other illness when we are under pressure, but until now we have mostly had circumstantial evidence for a link between the brain and the immune system ”,says lead Garvan researcher Associate Professor Fabienne Mackay.
Revised:  he said . "Most of us expect to come down with a cold or other illness when we are under pressure, but until now we have mostly had circumstantial evidence for a link between the brain and the immune system ," said lead Garvan researcher Associate Professor Fabienne Mackay.
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Original:  he said . "Most of us expect to come down with a cold or other illness when we are under pressure, but until now we have mostly had circumstantial evidence for a link between the brain and the immune system ”,says lead Garvan researcher Associate Professor Fabienne Mackay.
Revised:  he said . "Most of us expect to come down with a cold or other illness when we are under pressure, but until now we have mostly had circumstantial evidence for a link between the brain and the immune system ”,says lead Garvan researcher , associate Professor Fabienne Mackay.
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Original:  "During periods of stress, nerves release a lot of NPY and it gets into the bloodstream, where it directly impacts on the cells in the immune system that look out for and destroy pathogens (bacteria and viruses) in the body , " said Mackay.
Revised:  "During periods of stress, nerves release a lot of NPY and it gets into the bloodstream, where it directly impacts on the cells in the immune system that look out for and destroy pathogens (bacteria and viruses) in the body . " said Mackay.
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Original:  "During periods of stress, nerves release a lot of NPY and it gets into the bloodstream, where it directly impacts on the cells in the immune system that look out for and destroy pathogens (bacteria and viruses) in the body , " said Mackay.
Revised:  "During periods of stress, nerves release a lot of NPY and it gets into the bloodstream, where it directly impacts on the cells in the immune system that look out for and destroy pathogens (bacteria and viruses) in the body , " 
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Original:  Mackay adds that: “ Under normal conditions, circulating immune cells produce small amounts of NPY, which enables the immune cells on sentry duty and the TH1 immune cells to operate - it's a yin and yang kind of situation.
Revised:  " Under normal conditions, circulating immune cells produce small amounts of NPY, which enables the immune cells on sentry duty and the TH1 immune cells to operate - it's a yin and yang kind of situation.
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Original:  But too much NPY means that the TH1 attack is prevented despite the foreign invaders being identified - and this is what happens during stress ”, The impact of stress on the body has been observed in athletes.
Revised:  But too much NPY means that the TH1 attack is prevented despite the foreign invaders being identified - and this is what happens during stress ,” added McKay. The impact of stress on the body has been observed in athletes.
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Original:  PHD researcher at the University of Queensland, Luke Spence, together with the Australian Institute of Sport, studied elite and recreational athletes over five months.
Revised:  Ph. D researcher at the University of Queensland, Luke Spence, together with the Australian Institute of Sport, studied elite and recreational athletes over five months.
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Original:  "A lot of elite athletes put themselves through vast amounts of physical stress in their training, but also their emotional, psychological stress of feeling the pressure of Australia on their shoulders, wanting to compete and wanting to do their best," Mr Spence said .
Revised:  "A lot of elite athletes put themselves through vast amounts of physical stress in their training, but also their emotional, psychological stress of feeling the pressure of Australia on their shoulders, wanting to compete and wanting to do their best," said Spence .
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Original:  Its not just athletes who are prone to stress.
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Original:  "I think it has a huge impact for the work force and also for employers - if their employees are constantly stressed, constantly under pressure, they are more likely to get sick," Mr Spence said.
Revised:  "I think it has a huge impact for the work force and also for employers - if their employees are constantly stressed, constantly under pressure, they are more likely to get sick," Spence said.
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Original:  Professor Herzog warns people to minimise stress before it becomes a problem.
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Original:  The Garvan Institute in Sydney has discovered that a hormone, known as neuropeptide Y, (NPY) is released into the body during times of stress.
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Original:  The Garvan Institute in Sydney has discovered that a hormone, known as neuropeptide Y, (NPY) is released into the body during times of stress.
Revised:  The Garvan Institute in Sydney has discovered that a hormone, known as (NPY) is released into the body during times of stress.
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Original:  Ph. D researcher at the University of Queensland, Luke Spence ,  together with the Australian Institute of Sport, studied elite and recreational athletes over five months.
Revised:  Ph. D researcher at the , together with the Australian Institute of Sport, studied elite and recreational athletes over five months.
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Original:  Ph. D researcher at the University of Queensland, Luke Spence ,  together with the Australian Institute of Sport, studied elite and recreational athletes over five months.
Revised:  Ph. D researcher at the University of Queensland, Luke Spence , , together with the Australian Institute of Sport, studied elite and recreational athletes over five months.
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Original:  The Garvan research will be published in the Journal of Experimental Medicine , Volume 202, No. 11
Revised:  The Garvan research will be published in the , Volume 202, No. 11
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Original:  The organistions are assed across four sectors  Corporate Governance, Environmental Impact, Workplace Practices and Social Impact  producing a final result.
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Original:  The organistions are assed across four sectors  Corporate Governance, Environmental Impact, Workplace Practices and Social Impact  producing a final result.
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Original:  This year  the Westpac Banking Corporation gained the only AAA rating followed by Australia and New Zealand Banking Group Limited and Australian Postal Corporation with AA ratings.
Revised:  This year , the Westpac Banking Corporation gained the only AAA rating followed by Australia and New Zealand Banking Group Limited and Australian Postal Corporation with AA ratings.
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Original:  Global CEO of RepuTex, Ms Laurel Grossman said “ More companies are recognising the value of CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) and the vital role it plays in managing mainstream financial risk,” she also said “ This year 66 companies across Australia and New Zealand were rated in the A range (-A to AAA)  up from 58 companies last year.
Revised:  Global CEO of RepuTex, Ms Laurel Grossman said “ more companies are recognising the value of CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) and the vital role it plays in managing mainstream financial risk,” she also said “ This year 66 companies across Australia and New Zealand were rated in the A range (-A to AAA) up from 58 companies last year.
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Original:  Global CEO of RepuTex, Ms Laurel Grossman said “ More companies are recognising the value of CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) and the vital role it plays in managing mainstream financial risk,” she also said “ This year 66 companies across Australia and New Zealand were rated in the A range (-A to AAA)  up from 58 companies last year.
Revised:  Global CEO of RepuTex, Ms Laurel Grossman said “ More companies are recognising the value of CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) and the vital role it plays in managing mainstream financial risk,” adding “ This year 66 companies across Australia and New Zealand were rated in the A range (-A to AAA) up from 58 companies last year.
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Original:  Global CEO of RepuTex, Ms Laurel Grossman said “ More companies are recognising the value of CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) and the vital role it plays in managing mainstream financial risk,” she also said “ This year 66 companies across Australia and New Zealand were rated in the A range (-A to AAA)  up from 58 companies last year.
Revised:  Global CEO of RepuTex, Ms Laurel Grossman said “ More companies are recognising the value of CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) and the vital role it plays in managing mainstream financial risk,” she also said “ this year 66 companies across Australia and New Zealand were rated in the A range (-A to AAA) up from 58 companies last year.
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Original:  Global CEO of RepuTex, Ms Laurel Grossman said “ More companies are recognising the value of CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) and the vital role it plays in managing mainstream financial risk,” she also said “ This year 66 companies across Australia and New Zealand were rated in the A range (-A to AAA)  up from 58 companies last year.
Revised:  Global CEO of RepuTex, Ms Laurel Grossman said “ More companies are recognising the value of CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) and the vital role it plays in managing mainstream financial risk,” she also said “ This year 66 companies across Australia and New Zealand were rated in the A range (-A to AAA) , up from 58 companies last year.
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Original: South Korean antitrust regulators fined the Microsoft company 32 billion won which is equal to around $32 million.
Revised: South Korean antitrust regulators fined the Microsoft company 32 billion Won which is equal to around $32 million.
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Original:  Regulators demanded that Microsoft produced two different Windows operating systems within 180 days.
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Original:  South Korean antitrust regulators fined the Microsoft company 32 billion Won which is equal to around $32 million.
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Original:  Regulators demanded that Microsoft produced two different Microsoft Windows within 180 days.
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Original: South Korean antitrust regulators fined the Microsoft company 32 billion Won which is equal to around US$ 32 million .
Revised: South Korean antitrust regulators fined the Microsoft company 32 billion Won ( US$ 32 million .
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Original: "He felt he had no option but to fight in the only way he could, with his body," Mr Job said in a statement . "But above all, he spoke of his dread of long-term detention, telling of waking continually in the morning with a sense of profound despair and foreboding due to his incarceration, and telling me he feared the mental health damage he had seen in so many long-term detainees," he said.
Revised: "He felt he had no option but to fight in the only way he could, with his body," Mr Job . "But above all, he spoke of his dread of long-term detention, telling of waking continually in the morning with a sense of profound despair and foreboding due to his incarceration, and telling me he feared the mental health damage he had seen in so many long-term detainees," he said.
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Original:  "I've written to them urging them to get off their protest and making it clear to them that the Government doesn't consider cases while people are engaging in this sort of potentially very harmful protest    .
Revised:  "I've written to them urging them to get off their protest and making it clear to them that the Government doesn't consider cases while people are engaging in this sort of potentially very harmful protest ." .
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Original: Jen Wen Zhang, a detainee at Sydney's Villawood Immigration Detention centre , has refused food since October 20.
Revised: Jen Wen Zhang, a detainee at Sydney's Villawood Immigration Detention Centre , has refused food since October 20.
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Original:  Mr Zhang and five other Chinese asylum seekers began the strike in protest at Australia's mandatory detention policy.
Revised:  Mr Zhang and five other Chinese asylum seekers began the strike in protest at Australia's Mandatory Detention policy.
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Original: A Chinese man in an Australian immigration detention is still refusing food, seven weeks after starting his hunger strike.
Revised: A Chinese man in Australian immigration detention is still refusing food, seven weeks after starting his hunger strike.
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Original:  Now back in Villawood , he is being closely monitored.
Revised:  Now back in Villawood he is being closely monitored.
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Original:  Three of the six hunger strikers ended their protest in November and a fourth detainee also pulled out .
Revised:  Five of the six hunger strikers ended their protest in November and a fourth detainee also pulled out .
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Original:  Three of the six hunger strikers ended their protest in November and a fourth detainee also pulled out .
Revised:  Three of the six hunger strikers ended their protest in November .
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Original: A Chicago owner of an XBOX 360 console is filling a class action lawsuit against Microsoft, the company that manufactured the console.
Revised: A Chicago owner of an Xbox 360 console is filling a class action lawsuit against Microsoft, the company that manufactured the console.
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Original:  Microsoft continues to deny that the problems themselves are widespread.
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Original:  Microsoft continues to deny that the problems themselves are widespread.
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Original: A Xbox 360 A Chicago owner of an Xbox 360 console is filling a class action lawsuit against Microsoft, the company that manufactured the console.
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Original: An Xbox 360 A Chicago owner of an Xbox 360 console is filling a class action lawsuit against Microsoft, the company that manufactured the console.
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Original: An Xbox 360 A Chicago owner of an Xbox 360 console is filing a class action lawsuit against Microsoft, the company that manufactured the console.
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Original: An Xbox 360 A Chicago owner of an Xbox 360 console is filing a class action lawsuit against Microsoft, the company that manufactured the console.
Revised: An Xbox 360 A Chicago owner of an console is filing a class action lawsuit against Microsoft, the company that manufactured the console.
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Original: An Xbox 360 A Chicago owner of an Xbox 360 console is filing a class action lawsuit against Microsoft, the company that manufactured the console.
Revised: An Xbox 360 A Chicago owner of an Xbox 360 console is filing a against Microsoft, the company that manufactured the console.
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Original:  He further claims that this rushed release resulted in the company including a faulty power supply and central processor that overheats, resulting in the damage of heat-sensitive chips within the console.
Revised:  He further claims that this rushed release resulted in the company including a faulty and that overheats, resulting in the damage of heat-sensitive chips within the console.
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Original:  No bomb was found when authorities searched the airplane.
Revised:  A bomb was found when authorities searched the airplane.
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Original: Reports indicate that after arriving from Quito, Ecuador, and clearing a customs check in Miami, the passenger claimed to have a bomb in his carry-on bag just after boarding the plane that was about to take off for Orlando, Florida.
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Original:  Alpizar was a Costa Rican native who became a U.S. citizen and lived in Maitland, an Orlando suburb.
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Original:  According to CNN, a federal official indicated that this is the first time an air marshal has fired a weapon near an airplane   .
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Original: The 44-year-old passenger ran out of the door of the airplane after he reboarded the plane, following a customs check in Miami in Miami .
Revised: The 44-year-old passenger ran out of the door of the airplane after he reboarded the plane, following a customs check in Miami .
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Original: The marshals say Alpizar calimed that he was carrying a bomb before being killed.
Revised: The marshals say Alpizar claimed that he was carrying a bomb before being killed.
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Original: Debra Saunders, the student's mother, was unhappy about the situation and wonders if the school is trying to discriminate against Christians. w:Sikhism|Sikh students are permitted to wear bracelets called karas, which are a mandatory part of their religion.
Revised: Debra Saunders, the student's mother, was unhappy about the situation and wonders if the school is trying to discriminate against Christians. Sikh students are permitted to wear bracelets called karas, which are a mandatory part of their religion.
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Original:  However, it appears that wearing a crucifix is a no-no , since the school's policies prohibit it.
Revised:  However, it appears that wearing a crucifix is deplorable , since the school's policies prohibit it.
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Original:  However, it appears that wearing a crucifix is deplorable, since the school's policies prohibit it.
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Original:  Martin has since retracted the Muslim claim and now believes that Obama was born in Hawaii but was fathered by journalist and labor activist rather than Kenyan economist .
Revised:  Martin has since retracted the Muslim claim and now believes that Obama was fathered by journalist and labor activist rather than Kenyan economist .
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Original:  In October 2008, he filed a lawsuit against the state to release Obama's birth certificate, but it was summarily thrown out by the courts.
Revised:  In October 2008, he filed a lawsuit against the state to release Obama's birth certificate, but it was dismissed by the courts.
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Original:  He  believes that the Obama presidency has been a failure and has asked for Obama to resign.
Revised:  He also believes that the Obama presidency has been a failure and has asked for Obama to resign.
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Original:  According to CNN, Martin has since retracted the Muslim claim and now believes that Obama was fathered by journalist and labor activist rather than Kenyan economist .
Revised:  According to CNN, Martin has retracted the Muslim claim and now believes that Obama was fathered by journalist and labor activist rather than Kenyan economist .
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Original: The anticipated legislation on voluntary student unionism, as proposed earlier by the  Government education minister Brendan Nelson passed the House  December 7 and is now to be debated in the Senate.
Revised: The bill on voluntary student unionism, as proposed earlier by the Government education minister Brendan Nelson passed the House December 7 and is now to be debated in the Senate.
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Original: The anticipated legislation on voluntary student unionism, as proposed earlier by the  Government education minister Brendan Nelson passed the House  December 7 and is now to be debated in the Senate.
Revised: The anticipated legislation on voluntary student unionism, as proposed earlier by the Government education minister Brendan Nelson passed the House of Representatives on December 7 and is now to be debated in the Senate.
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Original:  The Higher Education Support Amendment (Abolition of Compulsory Up-Front Student Union Fees) Bill 2005, commonly known as "voluntary student unionism" or VSU, will have the effect of making the automatic joining of university students into the respective union , and the consequent abolition of the payment of union fees , which often go to amenities and services provided by the union .
Revised:  The Higher Education Support Amendment (Abolition of Compulsory Up-Front Student Union Fees) Bill 2005, commonly known as "voluntary student unionism" or VSU, will have the effect of removing the automatic joining of university students into the respective union , and the consequent abolition of the payment of union fees , which often go to amenities and services provided by the union .
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Original:  The Higher Education Support Amendment (Abolition of Compulsory Up-Front Student Union Fees) Bill 2005, commonly known as "voluntary student unionism" or VSU, will have the effect of making the automatic joining of university students into the respective union , and the consequent abolition of the payment of union fees , which often go to amenities and services provided by the union .
Revised:  The Higher Education Support Amendment (Abolition of Compulsory Up-Front Student Union Fees) Bill 2005, commonly known as "voluntary student unionism" or VSU, will have the effect of making the automatic joining of university students into their respective unions , and the consequent abolition of the payment of union fees , which often go to amenities and services provided by the union .
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Original:  The Higher Education Support Amendment (Abolition of Compulsory Up-Front Student Union Fees) Bill 2005, commonly known as "voluntary student unionism" or VSU, will have the effect of making the automatic joining of university students into the respective union , and the consequent abolition of the payment of union fees , which often go to amenities and services provided by the union .
Revised:  The Higher Education Support Amendment (Abolition of Compulsory Up-Front Student Union Fees) Bill 2005, commonly known as "voluntary student unionism" or VSU, will have the effect of making the automatic joining of university students into the respective union , and the consequent abolition of the payment of union fees . These fees go towards amenities and services provided by the union .
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