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Original:  Kandahār   , also spelled Qandahār, (کندهار or قندهار) is the second largest city in Afghanistan, with a population of 450,300 (2006 estimate).
Revised:  Kandahār , also spelled Qandahār, (کندهار or قندهار) , the second largest city in Afghanistan, with a population of 450,300 (2006 estimate).
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Original:  The main inhabitants of Kandahar province are the w: Pashtun people.
Revised:  The main inhabitants of Kandahar province are the Pashtun people.
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Original:  Officials there say that the reporters are suspected of spying on Iran and had the assistance of the British embassy in Tehran.
Revised:  Officials there say the reporters are suspected of spying on Iran and had the assistance of the British embassy in Tehran.
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Original:  I England and Wales, currently  1 in 18 men and 1 in 20 women will be diagnosed with the disease.
Revised:  In England and Wales, currently 1 in 18 men and 1 in 20 women will be diagnosed with the disease.
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Original:  I England and Wales, currently  1 in 18 men and 1 in 20 women will be diagnosed with the disease.
Revised:  I England and Wales, currently about 1 in 18 men and 1 in 20 women will be diagnosed with the disease.
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Original:  New outbreaks of the lethal H5N2 strain of the avian influenza have been confirmed in Taiwan.
Revised:  New outbreaks of H5N2 strain of the avian influenza have been confirmed in Taiwan.
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Original:  New outbreaks of the lethal H5N2 strain of the avian influenza have been confirmed in Taiwan.
Revised:  New outbreaks of the lethal H5N2 have been confirmed in Taiwan.
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Original:  But in an interview by the French newspaper Le Monde, he said that "participating in the December 27 talks would be to legitimise the coup d' etat ".
Revised:  But in an interview by the French newspaper Le Monde, he said that "participating in the December 27 talks would be to legitimise the coup d' état ".
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Original: The United Kingdom Parliament is planning to expand the powers of bailiffs in pursuit of unpaid debts.
Revised: The United Kingdom Parliament is planning to expand the powers of bailiffs in pursuit of unpaid debts.
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Original:  Last week, President w: George W. Bush George W. Bush said that "you know very well that when it comes to certain matters, the U.S. government doesn't discuss operations."
Revised:  Meanwhile, President George W. Bush George W. Bush said that "you know very well that when it comes to certain matters, the U.S. government doesn't discuss operations."
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Original:  Bush ruled out consultations with other governments  prior to drone strikes  .
Revised:  He ruled out consultations with other governments prior to drone strikes .
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Original:  Bush ruled out consultations with other governments  prior to drone strikes  .
Revised:  Bush ruled out consultations with other governments prior to drone strikes operations .
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Original:  It comprises the area west and southwest of Peshawar between the Tochi River to the north and the Gomal river to the south, forming part of Pakistan's Federally Administered Tribal Areas (FATA).
Revised:  It comprises the area west and southwest of Peshawar between the Tochi River to the North and the Gomal river to the south, forming part of Pakistan's Federally Administered Tribal Areas (FATA).
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Original: South Waziristan (|جنوبی وزیرستان) is the southern part of Waziristan, a mountainous region of northwest Pakistan, bordering Afghanistan and covering some 11,585 km² (4,473 mi²).
Revised: South Waziristan is the southern part of Waziristan, a mountainous region of northwest Pakistan, bordering Afghanistan and covering some 11,585 km² (4,473 mi²).
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Original: Greek authorites told the Airbus A319's flight crew to return the jet to Athens International Airport after the airport was told by an anonymous telephone caller that a bomb was on the flight.
Revised: Greek authorities told the Airbus A319's flight crew to return the jet to Athens International Airport after the airport was told by an anonymous telephone caller that a bomb was on the flight.
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Original:  Local authorites then searched the aircraft 
Revised:  Local authorities then searched the aircraft 
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Original:  Local authorites then searched the aircraft 
Revised:  Local authorites then searched the aircraft , but no bomb was found
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Original:  The airliner reached an area close to the Turkish border when word was received and the aircraft turned round .
Revised:  The airliner reached an area close to the Turkish border when word was received and the aircraft turned around .
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Original:  UK Prime Minister     Tony Blair telephoned Prime Minister Meles Zenawi on Sunday to express his concern at the shootings.
Revised:  UK Prime Minister Tony Blair telephoned Zenawi on Sunday to express his concern at the shootings.
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Original:  Source "UK halts aid over Ethiopia deaths" BBC News category: afri
Revised:  Source category: afri
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Original: The now suspended constitution states that the president of the country's National Assembly will become the new leader of the country.
Revised: The now suspended constitution states that the president of the country's National Assembly should become the new leader of the country.
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Original:  This no longer has to take placedue to the suspended constitution
Revised:  However since the constitution has been dissolved, it is unlikely this will take place
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Original: Image:Kalitta Air Boeing 747 N713CK.jpg|A file photo of a Kallita 747 landing in Amsterdam's Schipol Airport]] Belgian official Etienne Schouppe has anounced that the final report into the wreck of a Kalitta Air Boeing 747 cargo plane crash at Brussels Airport will blame a bird strike.
Revised: Image:Kalitta Air Boeing 747 N713CK.jpg|A file photo of a Kallita 747 landing in Amsterdam's Schipol Airport]] Belgian official Etienne Schouppe has announced that the final report into the wreck of a Kalitta Air Boeing 747 cargo plane crash at Brussels Airport will blame a bird strike.
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Original:  Kalitta 747 N704CK was taking off from Brussels and had passed V1 speed four seconds ago when a bird strike occured in engine #3.
Revised:  Kalitta 747 N704CK was taking off from Brussels and was four seconds past V1 speed four seconds ago when a bird strike occured in engine #3.
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Original:  Kalitta 747 N704CK was taking off from Brussels and had passed V1 speed four seconds ago when a bird strike occured in engine #3.
Revised:  Kalitta 747 N704CK was taking off from Brussels and had passed V1 speed when a bird strike occured in engine #3.
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Original:  Kalitta 747 N704CK was taking off from Brussels and had passed V1 speed four seconds ago when a bird strike occured in engine #3.
Revised:  Kalitta 747 N704CK was taking off from Brussels and had passed V1 speed four seconds ago when a bird strike occurred in engine #3.
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Original:  Earlier this month, Kalitta anounced cost-cutting measures in response to the current financial crisis.
Revised:  Earlier this month, Kalitta announced cost-cutting measures in response to the current financial crisis.
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Original:  A quartter of the 800 workers are to be laid off, and eight or nine of the airline's fleet of 21 747s are to be taken out of service.
Revised:  A quarter of the 800 workers are to be laid off, and eight or nine of the airline's fleet of 21 747s are to be taken out of service.
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Original:  Two seconds lateror six seconds past V1 speed , the decision was taken to abort takeoff, but the jet was unable to stop in the distance left to it.
Revised:  Six seconds later , the decision was taken to abort takeoff, but the jet was unable to stop in the distance left to it.
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Original:  The said that it was "politically untenable" to prosecute them, pointing out that Wikileaks is hosted in many different countries accross the globe.
Revised:  They said that it was "politically untenable" to prosecute them, pointing out that Wikileaks is hosted in many different countries accross the globe.
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Original:  They said that it was "politically untenable" to prosecute them, pointing out that Wikileaks is hosted in many different countries accross the globe.
Revised:  They said that it was "politically untenable" to prosecute them, pointing out that Wikileaks is hosted in many different countries across the globe.
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Original: The Montgomery County Police in Maryland stated that they received a call at 7.55 local time ( 12.55 GMT) about a watermain break.
Revised: The Montgomery County Police in Maryland stated that they received a call at 7:55 local time ( 12.55 GMT) about a watermain break.
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Original: The Montgomery County Police in Maryland stated that they received a call at 7.55 local time ( 12.55 GMT) about a watermain break.
Revised: The Montgomery County Police in Maryland stated that they received a call at 7.55 local time ( 12:55 GMT) about a watermain break.
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Original:  A spokesman for the Montgomery County fire department , stated that at no less than twelve people have been rescued by a boat and helicopters from their automobiles after being stranded by the flooding.
Revised:  A spokesman for the Montgomery County fire department stated that at no less than twelve people have been rescued by a boat and helicopters from their automobiles after being stranded by the flooding.
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Original: A 168-centimetre (5.5 feet) water main has been reported broken at River Road and Bradley Drive in Bethesda, a city not far from Washington D.C.
Revised: A 168-centimeter (5.5 feet) water main has been reported broken at River Road and Bradley Drive in Bethesda, a city not far from Washington D.C.
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Original:  The Montgomery County Police in Maryland stated that they received a call at 7:55 local time (12:55 GMT) about a watermain break.
Revised:  The Montgomery County Police in Maryland stated that they received a call at 7:55 local time (12:55 GMT) about a water main break.
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Original:  Both Bradley Drive and River Road are closed for the time being
Revised:  Both Bradley Blvd and River Road are closed for the time being
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Original:  The names of those charged were not released, and they face charges of manslaughter and causing death by a reckless, thoughtless or dangerous act, which carry five nad four year terms respectively       
Revised:  The names of those charged were not released, and they face charges of manslaughter and causing death by a reckless, thoughtless or dangerous act, which carry life and four year terms respectively 
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Original:  The United States Food and Drug Administration wrote a warning letter to The Coca-Cola Company that Diet Coke Plus violates the Federal Food, Drug, and Cosmetic Act .
Revised:  The US Food and Drug Administration wrote a warning letter to The Coca-Cola Company that Diet Coke Plus violates the Federal Food, Drug, and Cosmetic Act .
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Original:  The United States Food and Drug Administration wrote a warning letter to The Coca-Cola Company that Diet Coke Plus violates the Federal Food, Drug, and Cosmetic Act .
Revised:  The United States Food and Drug Administration has written a warning letter to The Coca-Cola Company that Diet Coke Plus violates the Federal Food, Drug, and Cosmetic Act .
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Original:  Regardless, snack foods, such as carbonated soda, may never use the word " plus" because the FDA does not consider it appropriate to fortify snack foods.
Revised:  Regardless, snack foods, such as carbonated beverages. " plus" because the FDA does not consider it appropriate to fortify snack foods.
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Original:  File:World-of-coca-cola.jpg|World of Coca-Cola, Las Vegas, Nevada (By Michael Reeve, 24 March 2003.
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Original:  According to statute, foods labeled "plus" must contain at least 10 per cent more nutrients than comparable products.
Revised:  According to statute, foods labeled "plus" must contain at least 10 per cent more of the Reference Daily Intake (RDI) or Daily Reference Value (DRV) for a given nutrient "than an appropriate reference food" can legally call themselves "plus."
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Original:  Scientific American has reported that the product's Web site claims that Diet Coke Plus, introduced last year, "provides 15 percent of your RDI for niacin (a B-vitamin) and vitamins B6 and B12, and 10 percent for zinc and magnesium." [[File:World-of-coca-cola.jpg|World of Coca-Cola, Las Vegas, Nevada (By Michael Reeve, 24 March 2003.
Revised:  [[File:World-of-coca-cola.jpg|World of Coca-Cola, Las Vegas, Nevada (By Michael Reeve, 24 March 2003.
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Original:  According to statute, foods labeled "plus" must contain at least 10 per cent more of the Reference Daily Intake (RDI) or Daily Reference Value (DRV) for a given nutrient "than an appropriate reference food" can legally call themselves "plus . " 
Revised:  According to statute, foods must contain at least 10 per cent more of the Reference Daily Intake (RDI) or Daily Reference Value (DRV) for a given nutrient "than an appropriate reference food" can legally call themselves "plus . " 
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Original:  According to statute, foods labeled "plus" must contain at least 10 per cent more of the Reference Daily Intake (RDI) or Daily Reference Value (DRV) for a given nutrient "than an appropriate reference food" can legally call themselves "plus . " 
Revised:  According to statute, foods labeled "plus" must contain at least 10 per cent more of the Reference Daily Intake (RDI) or Daily Reference Value (DRV) for a given nutrient "than an appropriate reference food" in order to be called "plus . " 
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Original:  According to statute, foods labeled "plus" must contain at least 10 per cent more of the Reference Daily Intake (RDI) or Daily Reference Value (DRV) for a given nutrient "than an appropriate reference food" can legally call themselves "plus . " 
Revised:  According to statute, foods labeled "plus" must contain at least 10 per cent more of the Reference Daily Intake (RDI) or Daily Reference Value (DRV) for a given nutrient "than an appropriate reference food" can legally call themselves "plus " 
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Original: On Tuesday 23 December the menswear retailer , The Officers Club's administrators PricewaterhouseCoopers decided to close 32 of the 150 stores immediately.
Revised: On Tuesday , December 23, the menswear retailer , The Officers Club's administrators PricewaterhouseCoopers decided to close 32 of the 150 stores immediately.
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Original: On Tuesday 23 December the menswear retailer , The Officers Club's administrators PricewaterhouseCoopers decided to close 32 of the 150 stores immediately.
Revised: On Tuesday 23 December the menswear retailer The Officers Club's administrators PricewaterhouseCoopers decided to close 32 of the 150 stores immediately.
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Original:  Also on 23 December an international retailer of coffee, tea and various other hot beverages, Whittard of Chelsea, was placed into administration with Ernst & Young.
Revised:  Also on December 23 an international retailer of coffee, tea and various other hot beverages, Whittard of Chelsea, was placed into administration with Ernst & Young.
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Original:  On Christmas Eve, 24 December 2008 , the UK's largest independent entertainment retailer, Zavvi, went into administration due the loss of its supplier and not being able to pay its debts.
Revised:  On Christmas Eve, December 24 , the UK's largest independent entertainment retailer, Zavvi, went into administration due the loss of its supplier and not being able to pay its debts.
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Original:  PricewaterhouseCoopers also announced that 118 stores had been sold to TimeC 1215 limited  for an undisclosed fee.
Revised:  PricewaterhouseCoopers also announced that TimeC 1215 limited for an undisclosed fee.
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Original:  All stores will open as normal on Boxing Day, 26 December, for the normal post Christmas sale
Revised:  All stores opened as normal on Boxing Day, 26 December, for the normal post Christmas sale
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Original:  All stores opened as normal on Boxing Day, 26 December, for the normal post Christmas sale  
Revised:  All stores opened as normal on Boxing Day, 26 December, for the normal post Christmas sale . 
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Original:  The Officers Club began in the early 1990s in Sunderland and has headquarters is at Cramlington, Northumberland.
Revised:  The Officers Club began in the early 1990s in Sunderland and has headquarters at Cramlington, Northumberland.
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Original: Melbourne - Following its recent loss to South Africa, the Australian cricket team has replaced Jason Krejza for Nathan Hauritz for the traditional Boxing Day test to be played at the  Melbourne Cricket Ground in front of an expected crowd of 70,000.
Revised: Melbourne - Following its recent loss to South Africa, the Australian Cricket team has replaced Jason Krejza for Nathan Hauritz for the traditional Boxing Day test to be played at the Melbourne Cricket Ground in front of an expected crowd of 70,000.
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Original: Melbourne - Following its recent loss to South Africa, the Australian Cricket team has replaced Jason Krejza for W:Nathan _ Hauritz:Nathan Hauritz for the traditional Boxing Day test to be played at the [[W:MCG|Melbourne Cricket Ground in front of an expected crowd of 70,000.
Revised: Melbourne - Following its recent loss to South Africa, the Australian Cricket team has replaced Jason Krejza for Nathan Hauritz for the traditional Boxing Day test to be played at the [[W:MCG|Melbourne Cricket Ground in front of an expected crowd of 70,000.
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Original:  All rounder W:Andrew Symonds: Andrew Symonds kept his place despite being restricted in training with knee-soreness.
Revised:  All rounder Andrew Symonds kept his place despite being restricted in training with knee-soreness.
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Original: Melbourne - Following its recent loss to South Africa, the Australian Cricket team has replaced Jason Krejza for Nathan Hauritz for the traditional Boxing Day test to be played at the W:MCG| Melbourne Cricket Ground in front of an expected crowd of 70,000.
Revised: Melbourne - Following its recent loss to South Africa, the Australian Cricket team has replaced Jason Krejza for Nathan Hauritz for the traditional Boxing Day test to be played at the Melbourne Cricket Ground in front of an expected crowd of 70,000.
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Original: Melbourne - Following its recent loss to South Africa, the Australian Cricket team has replaced Jason Krejza for Nathan Hauritz for the traditional Boxing Day test to be played at the Melbourne Cricket Ground in front of an expected crowd of 70,000.
Revised:  Following its recent loss to South Africa, the Australian Cricket team has replaced Jason Krejza for Nathan Hauritz for the traditional Boxing Day test to be played at the Melbourne Cricket Ground in front of an expected crowd of 70,000.
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Original:  Australia, currently leading the work test team rankings must avoid an 3-0 loss to South Africa if they are to retain their current rankings.
Revised:  Australia, currently leading the work test team rankings must avoid an 3–0 loss to South Africa if they are to retain their current rankings.
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Original:  If they do loose the series, it will be the first time they have done so on home soil since they lost the West Indies in 1993-1993.
Revised:  If they do loose the series, it will be the first time they have done so on home soil since they lost the West Indies in 1993–1993.
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Original: Australia, currently leading the work test team rankings must avoid a 3–0 loss to South Africa if they are to retain their current rankings.
Revised: Australia, currently leading the work test team rankings must avoid a 3-0 loss to South Africa if they are to retain their current rankings.
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Original:  Australia lost the first test of the three game series by six wickets after South Africa chased down an almost  record 414 in their second innings  .
Revised:  Australia lost the first test of the three game series by six wickets after South Africa chased down an almost world record 414 in their second innings .
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Original:    The ice festival has consistently increased in size over the years, with more talented artists involved and more impressive techniques and pieces on show.
Revised:  Tang Guangjun, one of the sculptors, complained of the effects of global warming and hazardous conditions saying "it is even bigger and higher than last year's, and more difficult. The weather swings between warm and cold, so it becomes very wet and slippery on the ice. It is very dangerous for us." He added that "its huge size and unseasonably warm temperatures have made the job especially challenging." Organizers even have to use artificial snow. The ice festival has consistently increased in size over the years, with more talented artists involved and more impressive techniques and pieces on show.
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Original: ]] Father Christmas or "Shengdan laoren" ( Traditional Chinese: 聖誕老人, Simplified Chinese: 圣诞老人, Standard Cantonese: Sing Dan Lo Yan, literally "The Old Man of Christmas") is a name used in many English speaking countries, for the gift-bringing figure of Christmas.
Revised: ]] Father Christmas or "Shengdan laoren" ( literally "The Old Man of Christmas") is a name used in many English speaking countries, for the gift-bringing figure of Christmas.
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Original:  He was a 4th-century Greek Christian bishop of Myra in Lycia, a province of the Byzantine Anatolia, now in Turkey . Related new
Revised:  He was a 4th-century Greek Christian bishop of Myra in Lycia, a province of the Byzantine Anatolia, now in Turkey Related new
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Original:  He was a 4th-century Greek Christian bishop of Myra in Lycia, a province of the Byzantine Anatolia, now in Turkey . Related new
Revised:  He was a 4th-century Greek Christian bishop of Myra in Lycia, a province of the Byzantine Anatolia, now in Turkey . 
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Original:  In Harbin, city ice sculptors and organizers are building the giant Father Christmas, a 160 meters (525 ft) long and 24 meters high sculpture.
Revised:  In Harbin, city ice sculptors and organizers are building the massonFather Christmas, a 160 meters (525 ft) long and 24 meters high sculpture.
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Original:  In Harbin, city ice sculptors and organizers are building the massonFather Christmas, a 160 meters (525 ft) long and 24 meters high sculpture.
Revised:  In Harbin, city ice sculptors and organizers are building the giant Father Christmas, a 160 meters (525 ft) long and 24 meters high sculpture.
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Original:  China has built the world’s largest Santa Claus ice sculpture  for the upcoming 25th International Ice and Snow Sculpture Festival in Heilongjiang Province.
Revised:  The world’s largest Santa Claus ice sculpture for the upcoming 25th International Ice and Snow Sculpture Festival in Heilongjiang Province.
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Original:  He was a 4th-century Greek Christian bishop of Myra in Lycia, a province of the Byzantine Anatolia, now in Turkey  
Revised:  He was a 4th-century Greek Christian bishop of Myra in Lycia, a province of the Byzantine Anatolia, now in Turkey . 
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Original:  He was a 4th-century Greek Christian bishop of Myra in Lycia, a province of the Byzantine Anatolia, now in Turkey  
Revised:  He was a 4th-century Greek Christian bishop of Myra in Lycia, a province of the Byzantine Anatolia, now in Turkey Sister
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