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Original:  These bombs killed at least 28 and wounded 130  and were so powerful that 30 houses were destroyed.
Revised:  These bombs killed at least 28 and wounded 130 , and were so powerful that 30 houses were destroyed.
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Original: On Sunday, four children were among seven others that were killed when the pursued suspect who, after refusing to stop for police, slammed into the GMC Sierra pickup truck carrying a family, two adults and five children.
Revised: On Sunday, four children were among seven that were killed when the pursued suspect who, after refusing to stop for police, slammed into the GMC Sierra pickup truck carrying a family, two adults and five children.
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Original:  The man supposedly lured the women up to his apartment stating that he was going to give her money for the taxi fair , and it ’s there that the incident is said to have happened.
Revised:  The man supposedly lured the women up to his apartment stating that he was going to give her money for the taxi fare , and it ’s there that the incident is said to have happened.
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Original:  The man supposedly lured the women up to his apartment stating that he was going to give her money for the taxi fair , and it ’s there that the incident is said to have happened.
Revised:  The man supposedly lured the women up to his apartment stating that he was going to give her money for the taxi fair , and it is there that the incident is said to have happened.
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Original:  The man supposedly lured the women up to his apartment stating that he was going to give her money for the taxi fair , and it ’s there that the incident is said to have happened.
Revised:  The man supposedly lured the women up to his apartment stating that he was going to give her money for the taxi fair , and it ’s there that the incident is alleged to have happened.
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Original:  The woman has explained that she begged him to use a condom  but to no avail and that it was when she told him that she had children waiting that he let her go.
Revised:  The woman has explained that she begged him to use a condom , but to no avail and that it was when she told him that she had children waiting that he let her go.
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Original:  The woman has explained that she begged him to use a condom  but to no avail and that it was when she told him that she had children waiting that he let her go.
Revised:  The woman has explained that she begged him to use a condom but to no avail . However, it was when she told him that she had children waiting that he let her go.
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Original:  The man  on the other hand  told the police that he had actually paid here 3  512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
Revised:  The man , on the other hand told the police that he had actually paid here 3 512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
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Original:  The man  on the other hand  told the police that he had actually paid here 3  512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
Revised:  The man on the other hand , told the police that he had actually paid here 3 512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
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Original:  The man  on the other hand  told the police that he had actually paid here 3  512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
Revised:  The man on the other hand told the police that he had paid her 3 512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
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Original:  The man  on the other hand  told the police that he had actually paid here 3  512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
Revised:  The man on the other hand told the police that he had actually paid here 3 , 512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
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Original:  The man  on the other hand  told the police that he had actually paid here 3  512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
Revised:  The man on the other hand told the police that he had actually paid here 3 512 Swedish krona (US 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
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Original:  The man  on the other hand  told the police that he had actually paid here 3  512 Swedish Kr ( 483 USD ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
Revised:  The man on the other hand told the police that he had actually paid here 3 512 Swedish Kr ( 483 ) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
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Original:  It’s still not confirmed that he has in fact been infected.
Revised:  It is not confirmed whether the man been infected.
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Original:  Normally sexual assault is punishable by minimum 2 years prison in Sweden
Revised:  Sexual assault in Sweden is punishable by minimum 2 years prison in Sweden
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Original:  Normally sexual assault is punishable by minimum 2 years prison in Sweden
Revised:  Normally sexual assault is punishable by minimum 2 years prison 
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Original:  However, it was  when she told him that she had children waiting  that he let her go.
Revised:  However, it was only when she told him that she had children waiting that he let her go.
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Original:  However, it was only when she told him that she had children waiting at home, that he let her go.
Revised:  It was only when she told him that she had children waiting at home, that he let her go.
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Original:  The man supposedly lured the women up to his apartment stating that he was going to give her money for the taxi fare, and it is there that the incident is alleged to have happened.
Revised:  The man supposedly lured the woman up to his apartment stating that he was going to give her money for the taxi fare, and it is there that the incident is alleged to have happened.
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Original: It is not confirmed whether the man  been infected.
Revised: It is not confirmed whether the man has been infected.
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Original:  Sexual assault in Sweden is punishable by minimum 2 years prison
Revised:  Sexual assault in Sweden is punishable by a minimum of two years in prison
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Original: The man, on the other hand, told the police that he had paid her 3,512 Swedish krona (US$483) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually exited and drunk.
Revised: The man, on the other hand, told the police that he had paid her 3,512 Swedish krona (US$483) as he believed her to be a prostitute and that he was both sexually excited and drunk.
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Original: Image:Michael Schumacher-I'm the man (cropped).jpg|Michael Schumacher Retired Formula 1 driver Michael Schumacher has called off his return due to a neck injury.
Revised:  Retired Formula 1 driver Michael Schumacher has called off his return due to a neck injury.
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Original:  He said "Unfortunately we did not manage to get a grip on the pain in the neck which occurred after the private F1-day in Mugello ". [[Image:Michael Schumacher-I'm the man (cropped).jpg|Michael Schumacher]] Schumacher who injured his neck in a bike accident in February aggravated his injury whilst trying out a 2007 F1 car as he was preparing for his comeback.
Revised:  He said "Unfortunately we did not manage to get a grip on the pain in the neck which occurred after the private F1-day in Mugello ." [[Image:Michael Schumacher-I'm the man (cropped).jpg|Michael Schumacher]] Schumacher who injured his neck in a bike accident in February aggravated his injury whilst trying out a 2007 F1 car as he was preparing for his comeback.
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Original:  The bike accident caused fractures in the area of head and neck which eventually turned out to be to severe for Formula 1 racing according to Schumacher.
Revised:  The bike accident caused fractures in the area of head and neck which eventually turned out to be too severe for Formula 1 racing according to Schumacher.
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Original:  He holds the record for the most Formula 1 starts with out scoring a single point at 49 points
Revised:  He holds the record for the most Formula 1 starts with out scoring a single point at 49 starts
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Original:  He holds the record for the most Formula 1 starts with out scoring a single point at 49 starts  
Revised:  He holds the record for the most Formula 1 starts with out scoring a single point at 49 starts . 
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Original:  He holds the record for the most Formula 1 starts with out scoring a single point at 49 starts.
Revised:  He holds the record for the most Formula 1 starts without scoring a single point at 49 starts.
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Original: The theme park released a statement saying that the cause of the fault was to do with the lift chain .
Revised: The theme park released a statement saying that a lift chain malfunctioned is to blame .
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Original:  One of the passengers stuck was Shannon Brown, she said "There was a lot of noise, parts went flying.
Revised:  Shannon Brown, one of the passengers stuck was Shannon Brown, she said "There was a lot of noise, parts went flying.
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Original:  One of the passengers stuck was Shannon Brown, she said "There was a lot of noise, parts went flying.
Revised:  One of the passengers on the ride, said "There was a lot of noise, parts went flying.
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Original:  " It gave a pretty rough stop -- knocked my glasses off."
Revised:  It gave a pretty rough stop -- knocked my glasses off."
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Original:  Fire captain Scott Kouns said "It was a hot day in the Santa Clara with temperatures in the 90s.
Revised:  According to fire captain Scott Kouns said "It was a hot day in the Santa Clara with temperatures in the 90s.
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Original:  Fire captain Scott Kouns said "It was a hot day in the Santa Clara with temperatures in the 90s.
Revised:  Fire captain Scott Kouns , "It was a hot day in the Santa Clara with temperatures in the 90s.
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Original: 24 people had to be rescued by fire fighters after a mechanical fault caused a roller coaster to stop mid journey at the  Great America Theme Park in Santa Clara, California.
Revised: 24 people had to be rescued by fire fighters after a mechanical fault caused a roller coaster to stop mid journey at the California's Great America Theme Park in Santa Clara, California.
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Original: 24 people had to be rescued by fire fighters after a mechanical fault caused a roller coaster to stop mid journey at the California's Great America Theme Park in Santa Clara, California.
Revised: 24 people had to be rescued by fire fighters after a mechanical fault caused a roller coaster to stop mid journey at the Great America Theme Park in Santa Clara, California.
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Original:  The Invertigo roller coaster stopped at around 12: 15pm with some riders as high as 80 ft off the ground.
Revised:  The Invertigo roller coaster malfunctioned at around 12: 15pm with some riders as high as 80 ft off the ground.
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Original:  The Invertigo roller coaster stopped at around 12: 15pm with some riders as high as 80 ft off the ground.
Revised:  The Invertigo roller coaster stopped at around 12: 15 p.m. (PDT) leaving some riders stranded as high as 80 ft off the ground.
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Original:  The Invertigo roller coaster stopped at around 12: 15pm with some riders as high as 80 ft off the ground.
Revised:  The Invertigo roller coaster stopped at around 12: 15pm with some riders as high as 80 ft from the ground.
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Original:  The ride was stuck for several hours, and the last passenger reached the ground at 5: 45pm.
Revised:  The ride was stuck for several hours, and the last passenger reached the ground at 5: 45 p.m..
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Original:  The theme park released a statement saying that a lift chain malfunctioned is to blame .
Revised:  The theme park released a statement saying that the cause of the fault was caused by a faulty lift chain .
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Original: Shannon Brown, one of the passengers on the ride,  said " There was a lot of noise, parts went flying.
Revised: Shannon Brown, one of the passengers on the ride, said " there was a lot of noise, parts went flying.
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Original:  Passengers were supplied with water as they waited in 90-degree heat.
Revised:  Passengers were given water as they waited in 90-degree heat.
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Original:  According to fire captain Scott Kouns  , "It was a hot day in the Santa Clara with temperatures in the 90s.
Revised:  According to fire captain Scott Kouns said , "It was a hot day in the Santa Clara with temperatures in the 90s.
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Original:  Any length of time trapped on a roller coaster would be uncomfortable, to say the least, and it took at least an hour to get the first person off the ride ". After the riders were released from the roller coaster the theme park offered complimentary soft drinks and pizza
Revised:  Any length of time trapped on a roller coaster would be uncomfortable, to say the least, and it took at least an hour to get the first person off the ride ." After the riders were released from the roller coaster the theme park offered complimentary soft drinks and pizza
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Original:  Any length of time trapped on a roller coaster would be uncomfortable, to say the least, and it took at least an hour to get the first person off the ride ". After the riders were released from the roller coaster the theme park offered complimentary soft drinks and pizza
Revised:  Any length of time trapped on a roller coaster would be uncomfortable, to say the least, and it took at least an hour to get the first person off the ride ". After the riders were rescued, the theme park offered complimentary soft drinks and pizza
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Original: The Invertigo Roller Coaster 24 people had to be rescued by fire fighters after a mechanical fault caused a roller coaster to stop mid journey at the Great America Theme Park in Santa Clara, California.
Revised:  24 people had to be rescued by fire fighters after a mechanical fault caused a roller coaster to stop mid journey at the Great America Theme Park in Santa Clara, California.
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Original: Two men , armed with handguns , held up employees of the Graff jewellers shop, taking 43 items, among them expensive watches, bracelets, and rings.
Revised: Two men armed with handguns , held up employees of the Graff jewellers shop, taking 43 items, among them expensive watches, bracelets, and rings.
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Original: Two men , armed with handguns , held up employees of the Graff jewellers shop, taking 43 items, among them expensive watches, bracelets, and rings.
Revised: Two men , armed with handguns held up employees of the Graff jewellers shop, taking 43 items, among them expensive watches, bracelets, and rings.
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Original:  The duo escaped in a blue BMW, which they soon abandoned for a Mercedes , which was driven to Farm Street .
Revised:  The duo escaped in a blue BMW, which they soon abandoned for a Mercedes . After driving to Farm Street .
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Original:  It is believed they may have driven off in a third vehicle.
Revised:  It is believed they may have got away in a third vehicle.
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Original: Two men armed with handguns held up employees of the Graff jewellers shop  New Bond Street, taking 43 items, among them expensive watches, bracelets, and rings.
Revised: Two men armed with handguns held up employees of the Graff jewellers shop on New Bond Street, taking 43 items, among them expensive watches, bracelets, and rings.
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Original: On Sunday night youths in the eastern suburb of Bagnolet  set 29 vehicles alight and threw stones and petrol bombs at police.
Revised: On Sunday night youths in the eastern suburb of Bagnolet , set 29 vehicles alight and threw stones and petrol bombs at police.
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Original:  Óscar Arias Sánchez, current President of Costa Rica and 1987 Nobel Peace Prize winner , appears to be the first dignitary and political figure to be infected with  H1N1 Swine Flu, official sources confirmed on Tuesday.
Revised:  Óscar Arias Sánchez, President of Costa Rica and 1987 Nobel Peace Prize winner , appears to be the first dignitary and political figure to be infected with H1N1 Swine Flu, official sources confirmed on Tuesday.
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Original:  Óscar Arias Sánchez, current President of Costa Rica and 1987 Nobel Peace Prize winner , appears to be the first dignitary and political figure to be infected with  H1N1 Swine Flu, official sources confirmed on Tuesday.
Revised:  Óscar Arias Sánchez, current President of Costa Rica and 1987 Nobel Peace Prize laureate , appears to be the first dignitary and political figure to be infected with H1N1 Swine Flu, official sources confirmed on Tuesday.
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Original:  Óscar Arias Sánchez, current President of Costa Rica and 1987 Nobel Peace Prize winner , appears to be the first dignitary and political figure to be infected with  H1N1 Swine Flu, official sources confirmed on Tuesday.
Revised:  Óscar Arias Sánchez, current President of Costa Rica and 1987 Nobel Peace Prize winner , appears to be the first dignitary and political figure to be infected with the H1N1 Swine Flu, official sources confirmed on Tuesday.
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Original:  According to the latest report from  Costa Rican health authorities, 27 patients have died from the virus and 798 have been infected
Revised:  According to the latest report from the Costa Rican health authorities, 27 patients have died from the virus and 798 have been infected
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Original:  According to the latest report from  Costa Rican health authorities, 27 patients have died from the virus and 798 have been infected
Revised:  According to the latest report from Costa Rican health authorities, 27 patients have died from the virus and 798 were infected
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Original:  The plane was carrying two local pilots as well as nine Australian, one Japanese and one Papua New Guinean passengers  
Revised:  The plane was carrying two local pilots as well as nine Australian, one Japanese and one Papua New Guinean passengers . 
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Original:  The search had been hampered by the same bad weather that had caused the aborted landing   
Revised:  The search had been hampered by the same bad weather that had caused the aborted landing . 
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Original:  Australian Prime Minister Kevin Rudd said that "There is a horrible tragedy involved when families send off their loved ones for what they expect to be the experience of a lifetime only for it to turn into a tragedy such as this.  
Revised:  Australian Prime Minister Kevin Rudd said that "There is a horrible tragedy involved when families send off their loved ones for what they expect to be the experience of a lifetime only for it to turn into a tragedy such as this. " 
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Original:  "I have requested the ministers of the various responsible authorities to commence investigations into the accident and to furnish a report to cabinet," said Somare  
Revised:  "I have requested the ministers of the various responsible authorities to commence investigations into the accident and to furnish a report to cabinet," said Somare . 
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Original:  On Kauai, some rivers have  begun to swell  [  .
Revised:  On Kauai, some rivers have already begun to swell [ .
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Original:  On Kauai, some rivers have  begun to swell  [  .
Revised:  On Kauai, some rivers have begun to swell . [ .
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Original:  According to the National Weather Service, a flash flood watch is issued to " Issued to indicate current or developing hydrologic conditions that are favorable for flash flooding in and close to the watch area, but the occurrence is neither certain or imminent".
Revised:  According to the National Weather Service, a flash flood watch is issued " Issued to indicate current or developing hydrologic conditions that are favorable for flash flooding in and close to the watch area, but the occurrence is neither certain or imminent".
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Original:  According to the National Weather Service, a flash flood watch is issued to " Issued to indicate current or developing hydrologic conditions that are favorable for flash flooding in and close to the watch area, but the occurrence is neither certain or imminent".
Revised:  According to the National Weather Service, a flash flood watch is issued to " to indicate current or developing hydrologic conditions that are favorable for flash flooding in and close to the watch area, but the occurrence is neither certain or imminent".
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Original:  The 98-meter-long ship ship has so far not reached the Straits of Gibraltar so far and is now being sought by the Portuguese  and Russian Navies.
Revised:  The 98-meter-long ship ship has so far not reached the Straits of Gibraltar so far and is now being sought by the Portuguese Navy and Russian Navies.
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Original:  The alledged boaders left the ship the same day according to its crew and the ship continued her voyage although it would have been expected to anchor at the nearest port.
Revised:  The alleged boarders left the ship the same day according to its crew and the ship continued her voyage although it would have been expected to anchor at the nearest port.
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Original:  If proven this could be ithe first case of piracy in Europe in the modern era.
Revised:  If proven this could be the first case of piracy in Europe in the modern era.
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Original:  There is speculation as to the reason for the ship's hijacking, as its cargo of wood, valued at 1.3 million euros, is not especially valuable , suggestions include possible contraband, and the possibility of a commercial dispute between the crew or some other party and the ship's owners
Revised:  There is speculation as to the reason for the ship's hijacking, as its cargo of wood, valued at 1.3 million euros, is not especially valuable . Suggestions include possible contraband, and the possibility of a commercial dispute between the crew or some other party and the ship's owners
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Original:  The 98-meter-long ship ship has so far not reached the Straits of Gibraltar and is now being sought by the Portuguese Navy and Russian Navy.
Revised:  The 98-meter-long ship has so far not reached the Straits of Gibraltar and is now being sought by the Portuguese Navy and Russian Navy.
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Original:  Suggestions include possible contraband, and the possibility of a commercial dispute between the crew or some other party and the ship's owners  
Revised:  Suggestions include possible contraband, and the possibility of a commercial dispute between the crew or some other party and the ship's owners . 
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Original:  Suggestions include possible contraband, and the possibility of a commercial dispute between the crew or some other party and the ship's owners . Related new
Revised:  Suggestions include possible contraband, and the possibility of a commercial dispute between the crew or some other party and the ship's owners Related new
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