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Original:  Lawson Tait went from antisepsis to asepsis, introducing principles and the iconic statutes that have remained valid to this day . Ernst von Bergmann  introduced the autoclave, a device used for the practice of the sterilization of surgical instruments.
Revised:  Lawson Tait went from antisepsis to asepsis, instilling practices such as a strict no-talking policy within his operating room and drastically limiting the number of people to come in contact with a patient's wound . Ernst von Bergmann introduced the autoclave, a device used for the practice of the sterilization of surgical instruments.
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Original:  Lawson Tait went from antisepsis to asepsis, introducing principles and the iconic statutes that have remained valid to this day . Ernst von Bergmann  introduced the autoclave, a device used for the practice of the sterilization of surgical instruments.
Revised:  Lawson Tait went from antisepsis to asepsis, introducing principles and the iconic statutes that have remained valid to this day . Ernst von Bergmann also introduced the autoclave, a device used for the practice of the sterilization of surgical instruments.
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Original:  Ayliffe et al. (2000) suggests that there are two types of asepsis – medical and surgical.
Revised:  There are two types of asepsis – medical and surgical.
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Original:  surgical or sterile asepsis includes procedures to eliminate micro-organisms from an area and is practiced by surgical technologists and nurses in operating theaters and treatment areas .
Revised:  surgical or sterile asepsis includes procedures to eliminate micro-organisms from an area and is practiced by surgical technologists and nurses . Ultimately, though, successful usage of aseptic operations depends on a combination of preparatory actions. For example, sterile equipment and fluids are used during invasive medical and nursing procedures. The largest manifestation of such aseptic techniques is in hospital operating theaters, where the aim is to keep patients free from hospital micro-organisms .
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Original:  In an operating room, while all members of the surgical team should demonstrate good aseptic technique, it is the role of the scrub nurse or surgical technologist to set up and maintain the sterile field.
Revised:  While all members of the surgical team should demonstrate good aseptic technique, it is the role of the scrub nurse or surgical technologist to set up and maintain the sterile field.
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Original:  Instruments should be sterilized through autoclaving or by using disposable equipment . Suture material or xenografts also need to be sterilized beforehand.
Revised:  Instruments should be sterilized through autoclaving or by using disposable equipment ; suture material or xenografts also need to be sterilized beforehand.
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Original:  Antibiotics may also be used  , and dirty, biologically-contaminated material should be subject to regulated disposal. 
Revised:  Antibiotics may also be used , and dirty, biologically-contaminated material should be subject to regulated disposal. References
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Original:  Medical illustration of Staphylococcus Despite efforts to preserve asepsis during surgery, there still persists a 1-3\% chance of a surgical site infection (SSI).
Revised:  Despite efforts to preserve asepsis during surgery, there still persists a 1-3\% chance of a surgical site infection (SSI).
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Original:  In 2017, nearly 20,000 patients in the United States died from Staphylococcus aureus in comparison to the 16,350 from diagnosed HIV . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Antiseptic Barrier nursing Body substance isolation Cleanliness Contamination control Disinfectant (measurements of effectiveness) Ignaz Semmelweis Sterilization (microbiology) Transmission-based precautions References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
Revised:  In 2017, nearly 20,000 patients in the United States died from Staphylococcus aureus in comparison to the 16,350 from diagnosed HIV References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Antiseptic Barrier nursing Body substance isolation Cleanliness Contamination control Disinfectant (measurements of effectiveness) Ignaz Semmelweis Sterilization (microbiology) Transmission-based precautions References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  In 2017, nearly 20,000 patients in the United States died from Staphylococcus aureus in comparison to the 16,350 from diagnosed HIV . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Antiseptic Barrier nursing Body substance isolation Cleanliness Contamination control Disinfectant (measurements of effectiveness) Ignaz Semmelweis Sterilization (microbiology) Transmission-based precautions References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
Revised:  In 2017, nearly 20,000 patients in the United States died from Staphylococcus aureus in comparison to the 16,350 from diagnosed HIV . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Antiseptic Barrier nursing Body substance isolation Cleanliness Contamination control Disinfectant (measurements of effectiveness) Ignaz Semmelweis Sterilization (microbiology) Transmission-based precautions References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  In 2017, nearly 20,000 patients in the United States died from Staphylococcus aureus in comparison to the 16,350 from diagnosed HIV . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Antiseptic Barrier nursing Body substance isolation Cleanliness Contamination control Disinfectant (measurements of effectiveness) Ignaz Semmelweis Sterilization (microbiology) Transmission-based precautions References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
Revised:  In 2017, nearly 20,000 patients in the United States died from Staphylococcus aureus in comparison to the 16,350 from diagnosed HIV . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  In 2017, nearly 20,000 patients in the United States died from Staphylococcus aureus in comparison to the 16,350 from diagnosed HIV . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Antiseptic Barrier nursing Body substance isolation Cleanliness Contamination control Disinfectant (measurements of effectiveness) Ignaz Semmelweis Sterilization (microbiology) Transmission-based precautions References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
Revised:  In 2017, nearly 20,000 patients in the United States died from Staphylococcus aureus in comparison to the 16,350 from diagnosed HIV . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Antiseptic Barrier nursing Body substance isolation Cleanliness Contamination control Disinfectant (measurements of effectiveness) Ignaz Semmelweis Sterilization (microbiology) Transmission-based precautions %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  Method File:Curette in sterile packaging.jpg|upA curette in sterile packaging Asepsis refers to any procedure that is performed under sterile conditions.
Revised:  Method Asepsis refers to any procedure that is performed under sterile conditions.
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Original:  Despite this, many hospitals continued to practice surgery in unsanitary conditions, with some surgeons taking pride in their bloodstained operating gowns.
Revised:  Despite this, many hospitals continued to practice surgery in unsanitary conditions, wit h some surgeons taking pride in their bloodstained operating gowns.
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Original: In 1983, Koevoet attracted considerable controversy when an Angolan citizen serving with the unit, Jonas Paul , was convicted of murder, attempted rape, and armed robbery by the South West African Supreme Court in Windhoek.
Revised: In 1983, Koevoet attracted considerable controversy when an Angolan citizen serving with the unit, Jonas Paulus , was convicted of murder, attempted rape, and armed robbery by the South West African Supreme Court in Windhoek.
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Original:  Paul and an accomplice went on a crime spree with a captured PLAN rifle, and had identified themselves as insurgents.
Revised:  Paulus and an accomplice went on a crime spree with a captured PLAN rifle, and had identified themselves as insurgents.
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Original:  Paul was sentenced to death and hanged in Windhoek on 4 June 1985.
Revised:  Paulus was sentenced to death and hanged in Windhoek on 4 June 1985.
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Original:  Around the same time, a white Koevoet non-commissioned officer, Norman Abrahams, appeared in court on charges of having murdered a suspected SWAPO sympathiser (Hitler) in his custody.
Revised:  Around the same time, a white Koevoet non-commissioned officer, Norman Abrahams, appeared in court on charges of having murdered a suspected SWAPO sympathiser in his custody.
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Original: Formation of Koevoet 200px| PLAN insurgents on the march . From the early to late 1970s, the brunt of counter-insurgency operations was borne by the South African Defence Force (SADF).
Revised: Formation of Koevoet 200px| PLAN insurgents on the march From the early to late 1970s, the brunt of counter-insurgency operations was borne by the South African Defence Force (SADF).
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Original:  By late 1978  the number of Ovambo Home Guard personnel stood at about 3,000.
Revised:  By late 1978 , the number of Ovambo Home Guard personnel stood at about 3,000.
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Original:  Koevoet was established in June 1979, at which time the unit consisted of 6 white South African policemen and 60 of the most skilled trackers from the Ovambo Home Guard.
Revised:  Koevoet was established in June 1979, at which time the unit consisted of six white South African policemen and 60 of the most skilled trackers from the Ovambo Home Guard.
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Original:  In May 1979  they captured their first insurgent.
Revised:  In May 1979 , they captured their first insurgent.
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Original:  Koevoet was formally known as Operation K of the SAP Security Branch's special operations division, but that title was almost never used.
Revised:  Koevoet was formally known as "Operation K" of the SAP Security Branch's special operations division, but that title was almost never used.
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Original: Koevoet (, translates to crowbar, abbreviated Operation K or SWAPOL-COIN) was the counter-insurgency branch of the South West African Police (SWAPOL).
Revised: Koevoet (, meaning crowbar, also known as Operation K or SWAPOL-COIN) was the counter-insurgency branch of the South West African Police (SWAPOL).
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Original:  After the war, she was captured, trial , and executed as a traitor by the Nationalist government of the Republic of China.
Revised:  After the war, she was captured, tried , and executed as a traitor by the Nationalist government of the Republic of China.
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Original:  She was raised in Japan and served as a spy for the Japanese Kwantung Army and puppet state of Manchukuo during the Second Sino-Japanese War.
Revised:  She was raised in Japan and served as a spy for the Japanese Kwantung Army andManchukuo during the Second Sino-Japanese War.
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Original:  She was raised in Japan and served as a spy for the Japanese Kwantung Army andManchukuo during the Second Sino-Japanese War.
Revised:  She was raised in Japan and served as a spy for the Japanese Kwantung Army and Manchukuo during the Second Sino-Japanese War.
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Original:  At the age of seventeen, her adoptive father raped her and later carried on an affair with her.
Revised:  At the age of seventeen, her adoptive father raped her and later continued to abuse her.
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Original: Executed spies Category:Female wartime spies Category:Manchu people Category:Aisin Gioro Category: Female-to-male cross-dressers Category:People of Manchukuo Category:Republic of China people born during Qing Category:World War II spies for Japan Category:Executed Republic of China people Category:Executed people from Beijing Category:People executed by the Republic of China by firing squad Category:20th-century executions by China Category:Women in war in China Category:Women in World War
Revised: Executed spies Category:Female wartime spies Category:Manchu people Category:Aisin Gioro Category: Female wartime cross-dressers Category:People of Manchukuo Category:Republic of China people born during Qing Category:World War II spies for Japan Category:Executed Republic of China people Category:Executed people from Beijing Category:People executed by the Republic of China by firing squad Category:20th-century executions by China Category:Women in war in China Category:Women in World War
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Original:  Based on the real-life story of Yoshiko Kawashima, Chinese princess turned ruthless Japanese spy, with fictional embellishments   .
Revised:  Based on the real-life story of Yoshiko Kawashima, Chinese princess turned ruthless Japanese spy, with fictional embellishments . .
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Original: Newspaper printers, often owned by newspaper publishers Magazine printers, usually independent of magazine publishers Book printers, often not directly connected with book publishers Postcard printers Stationery printers Packaging printers Trade printers, who offer wholesale rates within the printing industry Large format printers, who specialize in wide format prints, such as signs and banners .
Revised: Newspaper printers, often owned by newspaper publishers Magazine printers, usually independent of magazine publishers Book printers, often not directly connected with book publishers Postcard printers Stationery printers Packaging printers Trade printers, who offer wholesale rates within the printing industry Large format printers, who specialize in wide format prints, such as signs and banners 
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Original:  Their name stems from two rivers along the banks of which they have been living  time immemorial.
Revised:  Their name stems from two rivers along the banks of which they have been living since time immemorial.
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Original: Punan speak the Bah-Biau Punan language, one of the Rejang–Sajau languages.
Revised: Punan speak the Bah-Biau Punan language, one of the Punan languages.
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Original: Punan Ba or PunanNicolaisen, Ida. 1976.
Revised: Punan Bah or PunanNicolaisen, Ida. 1976.
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Original: Here some word spoken in Punan: 1. Nu denge? - How are you?
Revised: Here are some words spoken in Punan: 1. Nu denge? - How are you?
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Original:  4. Tupu koman si - Do you have your lunch/ diner /breakfast?
Revised:  4. Tupu koman si - Do you have your lunch/ dinner /breakfast?
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Original:  He has since established himself as one of Indonesia's most acclaimed actor with two Citra Award wins for Best Actor as the titular character in Riri Riza's Gie in 2005 and Best Supporting Actor as Bono in Edwin's Aruna & Her Palate.
Revised:  He has since established himself as one of Indonesia's most acclaimed actor with two Citra Award wins for Best Actor as the titular character in Riri Riza's Gie in 2005 and Best Supporting Actor in Edwin's Aruna & Her Palate.
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Original: Saputra has been announced to star as Aquanus in the Bumilangit Cinematic Universe based on the comic book superhero character created by Wid N. S. in 1968.
Revised: Saputra next is set to portray Aquanus in the Bumilangit Cinematic Universe based on the comic book superhero character created by Wid N. S. in 1968.
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Original:  In November 2020, he was announced to star in Riri Riza's upcoming film Paranoia.
Revised:  In November 2020, he was also cast to star in Riri Riza's upcoming film Paranoia.
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Original:  Education Ms. Ogwaro holds a  master's degree in veterinary science from the University of Edinburgh.
Revised:  Education Ogwaro holds a master's degree in veterinary science from the University of Edinburgh.
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Original:   Betty Ogwaro (Hon. Dr Betty Achan Ogwaro) served as Director of Animal Production for the Government of Southern Sudan until 1995 when she went into exile in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  Betty Ogwaro served as Director of Animal Production for the Government of Southern Sudan until 1995 when she went into exile in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Ogwaro is a founder of "Windows for Sudan", an NGO striving to advance the status of Sudanese women and promote their participation in development.
Revised:  Ogwaro is a founder of "Windows for Sudan", an NGO which seeks to promote the participation of Sudanese women and promote their participation in development.
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Original:  She also served as a consultant to UNIFEM on women’s issues and women’s leadership . is a member of the mediation team negotiating peace settlement between the Lord's Resistance Army (LRA) and the government of Uganda, and the first Sudanese woman to challenge Joseph Kony, the LRA’s top leader, face-to-face for the group’s atrocities in the Sudan and their lack of commitment to the peace process.
Revised:  She also served as a consultant to UNIFEM on women’s issues . is a member of the mediation team negotiating peace settlement between the Lord's Resistance Army (LRA) and the government of Uganda, and the first Sudanese woman to challenge Joseph Kony, the LRA’s top leader, face-to-face for the group’s atrocities in the Sudan and their lack of commitment to the peace process.
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Original:  She is also the chair of the Southern Sudanese Women Caucus, where influential women’s organizations work to respond to the needs of Sudanese communities.
Revised:  She was also the chair of the Southern Sudanese Women Caucus, where influential women’s organizations work to respond to the needs of Sudanese communities.
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Original:  She is a member of several committees, including specialized committee for Gender, Social Welfare, Youth and Sports.
Revised:  She was a member of several committees, including specialized committee for Gender, Social Welfare, Youth and Sports.
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Original: Education Ogwaro holds a bachelor ’ s degree in animal science with honors from the University of Juba.
Revised: Education Ogwaro holds a bachelor ' s degree in animal science with honors from the University of Juba.
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Original:  She has also consulted for UNIFEM on women ’ s issues. is a member of the mediation team negotiating peace settlement between the Lord's Resistance Army (LRA) and the government of Uganda, and the first Sudanese woman to challenge Joseph Kony, the LRA ’ s top leader, face-to-face for the group ’ s atrocities in the Sudan and their lack of commitment to the peace process.
Revised:  She has also consulted for UNIFEM on women ' s issues. is a member of the mediation team negotiating peace settlement between the Lord's Resistance Army (LRA) and the government of Uganda, and the first Sudanese woman to challenge Joseph Kony, the LRA ’ s top leader, face-to-face for the group ’ s atrocities in the Sudan and their lack of commitment to the peace process.
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Original:  She has also consulted for UNIFEM on women ’ s issues. is a member of the mediation team negotiating peace settlement between the Lord's Resistance Army (LRA) and the government of Uganda, and the first Sudanese woman to challenge Joseph Kony, the LRA ’ s top leader, face-to-face for the group ’ s atrocities in the Sudan and their lack of commitment to the peace process.
Revised:  She has also consulted for UNIFEM on women ’ s issues. is a member of the mediation team negotiating peace settlement between the Lord's Resistance Army (LRA) and the government of Uganda, and the first Sudanese woman to challenge Joseph Kony, the LRA ' s top leader, face-to-face for the group ’ s atrocities in the Sudan and their lack of commitment to the peace process.
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Original:  She has also consulted for UNIFEM on women ’ s issues. is a member of the mediation team negotiating peace settlement between the Lord's Resistance Army (LRA) and the government of Uganda, and the first Sudanese woman to challenge Joseph Kony, the LRA ’ s top leader, face-to-face for the group ’ s atrocities in the Sudan and their lack of commitment to the peace process.
Revised:  She has also consulted for UNIFEM on women ’ s issues. is a member of the mediation team negotiating peace settlement between the Lord's Resistance Army (LRA) and the government of Uganda, and the first Sudanese woman to challenge Joseph Kony, the LRA ’ s top leader, face-to-face for the group ' s atrocities in the Sudan and their lack of commitment to the peace process.
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Original:  She was also the chair of the Southern Sudanese Women Caucus, where influential women ’ s organizations work to respond to the needs of Sudanese communities.
Revised:  She was also the chair of the Southern Sudanese Women Caucus, where influential women ' s organizations work to respond to the needs of Sudanese communities.
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Original: German Sadulaev ’ s first book, Radio FUCK, told city tales of the thirty-something generation in St Petersburg.
Revised: German Sadulaev ' s first book, Radio FUCK, told city tales of the thirty-something generation in St Petersburg.
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Original:  Sadulaev ’ s fourth book, The Maya Pill, was shortlisted for the 2008 Russian Booker and for the 2009 National Bestseller .
Revised:  Sadulaev ' s fourth book, The Maya Pill, was shortlisted for the 2008 Russian Booker and for the 2009 National Bestseller .
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Original: Mahamadou Issoufou (born 1952) is a Nigerien politician who has served as President of Niger from since 7 April 2011 to 2 April 2021.
Revised: Mahamadou Issoufou (born 1952) is a Nigerien politician who served as the President of Niger from since 7 April 2011 to 2 April 2021.
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Original: Mahamadou Issoufou (born 1952) is a Nigerien politician who has served as President of Niger from since 7 April 2011 to 2 April 2021.
Revised: Mahamadou Issoufou (born 1952) is a Nigerien politician who has served as President of Niger from 7 April 2011 to 2 April 2021.
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Original:  Issoufou was the prime minister of Niger from 1993 to 1994, president of the National Assembly from 1995 to 1996, and he has been a candidate in each presidential election since 1993.
Revised:  Issoufou was the prime minister of Niger from 1993 to 1994, president of the National Assembly from 1995 to 1996, and he was a candidate in each presidential election since 1993.
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Original: Mahamadou Issoufou (born 1 January 1952 ) is a Nigerien politician who served as the President of Niger from 7 April 2011 to 2 April 2021.
Revised: Mahamadou Issoufou (born 1 January 1951 ) is a Nigerien politician who served as the President of Niger from 7 April 2011 to 2 April 2021.
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Original:  Category: 1952 births Category:Living people Category:Hausa people Category:Members of the National Assembly (Niger) Category:Nigerien Party for Democracy and Socialism politicians Category:People from Tahoua Region Category:Presidents of Niger Category:Presidents of the National Assembly (Niger) Category:Prime Ministers of Nig
Revised:  Category: 1951 births Category:Living people Category:Hausa people Category:Members of the National Assembly (Niger) Category:Nigerien Party for Democracy and Socialism politicians Category:People from Tahoua Region Category:Presidents of Niger Category:Presidents of the National Assembly (Niger) Category:Prime Ministers of Nig
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Original: The first of the three treaties of 1795 (First Treaty of Basel), France made peace with Prussia (represented by Karl August von Hardenberg) on 5 April;Engels, Ernst August Richard.
Revised: The first was with Prussia (represented by Karl August von Hardenberg) on 5 April;Engels, Ernst August Richard.
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