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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.171 On 22 April, Sihanouk charged five leftist deputies, including Khieu Samphan, Hou Yuon , and Hu Nim with the responsibility for the rebellion, however, Khieu and Hou managed to disappear into the maquis.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.171 On 22 April, Sihanouk charged five leftist deputies, including Khieu Samphan, Hou Yuon and Hu Nim with the responsibility for the rebellion, however, Khieu and Hou managed to disappear into the maquis.
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Original: Osborne, 1979 In May and June, the military became even more brutal with  aircraft bombing and strafing villages and jungle hide-outs, villages being burned to the ground or surrounded by the army , and peasants were massacred.
Revised: Osborne, 1979 In May and June, the military became even more brutal with aircraft bombing and strafing villages and jungle hide-outs, villages being burned to the ground or surrounded by the army and peasants massacred.
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Original:  The Khmer Loeu regions of Mondolkiri Province and Ratanakiri Province fell almost entirely under CPK control by the end of the decade.
Revised:  The Khmer Loeu regions of Mondulkiri Province and Ratanakiri Province fell almost entirely under CPK control by the end of the decade.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.185 As such, the Central Government intervention represented a significant development in rural administrative repression by Phnom Penh, resented by many peasants who cherished the traditional autonomy of village affairs.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.185 As such, the central Government intervention represented a significant development in rural administrative repression by Phnom Penh, resented by many peasants who cherished the traditional autonomy of village affairs.
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Original:  By Jan 1968, the Battambang rebels were in touch with others in kompong chhnang, and kompot .
Revised:  By January 1968, the Battambang rebels were in touch with others in kompong chhnang, and kompot .
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Original:  By Jan 1968, the Battambang rebels were in touch with others in kompong chhnang, and kompot .
Revised:  By Jan 1968, the Battambang rebels were in touch with others in Kompong Chhnang and Kompot .
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Original:  supposedly continued until January 17 , 1968,By 1968, the unrest had spread to many other provinces, where another 5000 or more people took to the forest when the “real action”
Revised:  supposedly continued until 17 , 1968,By 1968, the unrest had spread to many other provinces, where another 5000 or more people took to the forest when the “real action”
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Original:  on a military post at a place called Baydamram, in Battambang province where several wooden bridges were burnt by the Khmer RougeJackson, 2014, p.19Speech by Nuon Chea, Phnom Penh Radio, January 17, 1977, Foreign Broadcasts Information Service, Asia and Pacific: Daily Reports (Springfield, Va.: National Technical Information Service (hereafter FBIS), January 19, 1977, p. H2.
Revised:  on a military post at a place called Baydamram, in Battambang Province where several wooden bridges were burnt by the Khmer RougeJackson, 2014, p.19Speech by Nuon Chea, Phnom Penh Radio, January 17, 1977, Foreign Broadcasts Information Service, Asia and Pacific: Daily Reports (Springfield, Va.: National Technical Information Service (hereafter FBIS), January 19, 1977, p. H2.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.182-183 Furthermore, signs of unrest were also spotted in northeastern provinces like RatanakiriThis region was particularly sensitive to communist influences as the Pathet Lao and Vietnminh had been developing there for years, exploiting the discontent of the highlanders and turning them against the government.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.182-183 Furthermore, signs of unrest were also spotted in northeastern provinces like RatanakiriThis region was particularly sensitive to communist influence as the Pathet Lao and Vietnminh had been developing there for years, exploiting the discontent of the highlanders and turning them against the government.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.182-183 Furthermore, signs of unrest were also spotted in northeastern provinces like RatanakiriThis region was particularly sensitive to communist influences as the Pathet Lao and Vietnminh had been developing there for years, exploiting the discontent of the highlanders and turning them against the government.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.182-183 Furthermore, signs of unrest were also spotted in northeastern provinces like RatanakiriThis region was particularly sensitive to communist influences as the Pathet Lao and Vietn Minh had been developing there for years, exploiting the discontent of the highlanders and turning them against the government.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.184 Fighting continued to persist with increasing intensity from both sides till 25 February 1968, when the Khmer Rouge launched their most widespread and successful campaign yet.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.184 Fighting continued to persist with increasing intensity from both sides until 25 February 1968, when the Khmer Rouge launched their most widespread and successful campaign yet.
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Original:  However, the situation started to turn bleak for the Khmer Rouge, suffering heavier losses against an increasingly consolidated and violent army who destroyed their rebel camps and ration depots , and a mobilized group of townspeople who supported Sihanouk and went against the peasants.
Revised:  However, the situation started to turn bleak for the Khmer Rouge, suffering heavier losses against an increasingly consolidated and violent army who destroyed their camps and supplies , and a mobilized group of townspeople who supported Sihanouk and went against the peasants.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.189 On 8 April, an important Khmer Rouge network consisting of two large fortified hide-outs and important installations like a rifle factory at Phnom Veay Chap were destroyed by the army.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.189 On 8 April, an important Khmer Rouge network consisting of two large fortified hide-outs and important installations including a rifle factory at Phnom Veay Chap were destroyed by the army.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.193 It is also important to note that the RAK obtained minimal assistance from the North Vietnamese, the Viet Cong, and the Chinese.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.193 The RAK obtained minimal assistance from the North Vietnamese, the Viet Cong, and the Chinese.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.193 It is also important to note that the RAK obtained minimal assistance from the North Vietnamese, the Viet Cong, and the Chinese.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.193 It is also important to note that the RAK obtained minimal assistance from the North Vietnamese, the VC and the Chinese.
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Original:  Although North Vietnam had established a special unit in 1966 to train the Cambodian communists , it was extremely reluctant to alienate Sihanouk at a time when vital supplies were passing through the port of Kampong Saom and along the Ho Chi Minh Trail to the Viet Cong bases along the Cambodia Vietnam border.
Revised:  Although North Vietnam had established a special unit in 1966 to train the CPK , it was extremely reluctant to alienate Sihanouk at a time when vital supplies were passing through the port of Kampong Saom and along the Ho Chi Minh Trail to the Viet Cong bases along the Cambodia Vietnam border.
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Original:  Although North Vietnam had established a special unit in 1966 to train the Cambodian communists , it was extremely reluctant to alienate Sihanouk at a time when vital supplies were passing through the port of Kampong Saom and along the Ho Chi Minh Trail to the Viet Cong bases along the Cambodia Vietnam border.
Revised:  Although North Vietnam had established a special unit in 1966 to train the Cambodian communists , it was extremely reluctant to alienate Sihanouk at a time when vital supplies were passing through the port of Kampong Saom and along the Ho Chi Minh Trail to the VC bases along the Cambodia Vietnam border.
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Original:  Although North Vietnam had established a special unit in 1966 to train the Cambodian communists , it was extremely reluctant to alienate Sihanouk at a time when vital supplies were passing through the port of Kampong Saom and along the Ho Chi Minh Trail to the Viet Cong bases along the Cambodia Vietnam border.
Revised:  Although North Vietnam had established a special unit in 1966 to train the Cambodian communists , it was extremely reluctant to alienate Sihanouk at a time when vital supplies were passing through the port of Kampong Saom and along the Ho Chi Minh Trail to the Viet Cong bases along the Cambodia-Vietnam border.
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Original:  It was an important manifestation of the deep political divisions within Cambodian society.
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Original: By early 1970, the Khmer Rouge had reached a point of frustration as they had occupied a large section of the nation’s armed forces  but still failed to constitute a major military threat to the government (Kiernan, 1982, p.196) when Sihanouk's regime was overthrown by Lon Nol's  Coup.
Revised: By early 1970, the Khmer Rouge had reached a point of frustration as they had stymied a large section of the nation’s armed forces but still failed to constitute a major military threat to the government (Kiernan, 1982, p.196) when Sihanouk's regime was overthrown by Lon Nol's Coup.
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Original: By early 1970, the Khmer Rouge had reached a point of frustration as they had occupied a large section of the nation’s armed forces  but still failed to constitute a major military threat to the government (Kiernan, 1982, p.196) when Sihanouk's regime was overthrown by Lon Nol's  Coup.
Revised: By early 1970, the Khmer Rouge had reached a point of frustration as they had occupied a large section of the nation’s armed forces , but still failed to constitute a major military threat to the government (Kiernan, 1982, p.196) when Sihanouk's regime was overthrown by Lon Nol's Coup.
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Original:  Notes Bibliography Blanadet, Raymond.
Revised:  Bibliography Blanadet, Raymond.
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Original:  Notes Bibliography Blanadet, Raymond.
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Original: Osborne, 1994 , p.191 Apart from Sihanouk's strong-handed and corrupt Sangkum regime that fueled peasant grievances, there have been diverging strands contributing the origins of this rebellion.
Revised: Osborne, 1994 Apart from Sihanouk's strong-handed and corrupt Sangkum regime that fueled peasant grievances, there have been diverging strands contributing the origins of this rebellion.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982Osborne, 1994, p.193 Following the September 1966 election, the National Assembly was dominated by rightists with a minority of leftists, namely, Khieu Samphan, Hou Youn and Hu Nim, Osborne, 1994, p.187-188 all of whom played highly influential roles in leading the revolts to come.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982 Following the September 1966 election, the National Assembly was dominated by rightists with a minority of leftists, namely, Khieu Samphan, Hou Youn and Hu Nim, Osborne, 1994, p.187-188 all of whom played highly influential roles in leading the revolts to come.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982Osborne, 1994, p.193 Following the September 1966 election, the National Assembly was dominated by rightists with a minority of leftists, namely, Khieu Samphan, Hou Youn and Hu Nim, Osborne, 1994, p.187-188 all of whom played highly influential roles in leading the revolts to come.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982Osborne, 1994, p.193 Following the September 1966 election, the National Assembly was dominated by rightists with a minority of leftists, namely, Khieu Samphan, Hou Youn and Hu Nim, all of whom played highly influential roles in leading the revolts to come.
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Original: Kiernan, 1982, p.168 Osborne, 1994, p.192 While Sihanouk was away in France, Lon Nol had considerable autonomy in effecting his economic policies.
Revised: Kiernan, 1982, p.168 While Sihanouk was away in France, Lon Nol had considerable autonomy in effecting his economic policies.
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Original:  Osborne, 1994, p.190 Often identified as the main driver of the rebellion, the rammassage du paddy was an efficient system imposed by Lon Nol in early 1967 whereby the government channels (mainly the military) took charge of buying and collecting the rice crops from the peasants.
Revised:  Often identified as the main driver of the rebellion, the rammassage du paddy was an efficient system imposed by Lon Nol in early 1967 whereby the government channels (mainly the military) took charge of buying and collecting the rice crops from the peasants.
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Original: Osborne, 1979, p.192Chandler, 1991, p.164-165 Furthermore, the strong intervention and presence of the army in Battambang involved the forming of co-operatives, forcing villagers to regroup while bearing the obligation of being a co-operative member in paying subscriptions to finance loans that fell into the hands of corrupt officials.
Revised: Osborne, 1979Chandler, 1991, p.164-165 Furthermore, the strong intervention and presence of the army in Battambang involved the forming of co-operatives, forcing villagers to regroup while bearing the obligation of being a co-operative member in paying subscriptions to finance loans that fell into the hands of corrupt officials.
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Original:  Osborne, 1973, p.105 Generally, activities of the army in Battambang prior to the revolt were heavy-handed and often brutal, alienating and enraging the inhabitants.
Revised:  Generally, activities of the army in Battambang prior to the revolt were heavy-handed and often brutal, alienating and enraging the inhabitants.
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Original:  Osborne, 1992, p.190 Kiernan, 1982, p.171 In the afternoon, 200 rebels marched carrying banners denouncing the Lon Nol Government and U.S. imperialism, and attacked the J.S.R.K. (Royal Khmer Socialist Youth) agricultural settlement at Stung Kranhoung, the most obvious symbol of government presence in the area –the source of the villagers’ grievances and official mistreatment, as the target for their first organized display of force.
Revised:  Kiernan, 1982, p.171 In the afternoon, 200 rebels marched carrying banners denouncing the Lon Nol Government and U.S. imperialism, and attacked the J.S.R.K. (Royal Khmer Socialist Youth) agricultural settlement at Stung Kranhoung, the most obvious symbol of government presence in the area –the source of the villagers’ grievances and official mistreatment, as the target for their first organized display of force.
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Original:  Osborne, 1994, p.194 Hu Nim persisted in his attempts to maintain a public profile and to work alongside the government, but after repeated warnings from Sihanouk, he had also departed by the end of the year.
Revised:  Hu Nim persisted in his attempts to maintain a public profile and to work alongside the government, but after repeated warnings from Sihanouk, he had also departed by the end of the year.
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Original:  Osborne, 1994, p.194-195 On 5 May, workers from the Kompong Cham textile facotory, as well as its Director, and students from Kompong Cham University staged a demonstration with banners and loudspeakers, blaming the Government for the disappearance and suspected execution of Khieu and Hou.
Revised:  On 5 May, workers from the Kompong Cham textile facotory, as well as its Director, and students from Kompong Cham University staged a demonstration with banners and loudspeakers, blaming the Government for the disappearance and suspected execution of Khieu and Hou.
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Original: Kiernan, pp.254-255 With growing peasant unrest, Sihanouk was ready to sanction the brutal repression of leftist rebels, Osborne, 1994, p.192 using the greatest possible force.
Revised: Kiernan, pp.254-255 With growing peasant unrest, Sihanouk was ready to sanction the brutal repression of leftist rebels, using the greatest possible force.
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Original:  Osborne, 1979 At the end of April, Lon Nol resigned, though reasons behind his resignation were not clear (he was said to have suffered from some form of injury during the period of unrest).
Revised:  At the end of April, Lon Nol resigned, though reasons behind his resignation were not clear (he was said to have suffered from some form of injury during the period of unrest).
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Original:  Osborne, 1994, 191-193
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Original:  Due to its iron-chelating activity  hinokitiol has been called an "Iron Man molecule" in the scientific media, which is ironic because Tetsuo is translated into English as "Iron Man".
Revised:  Due to its iron-chelating activity , hinokitiol has been called an "Iron Man molecule" in the scientific media, which is ironic because Tetsuo is translated into English as "Iron Man".
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Original:  It kept it from harm against insects, wood-rotting fungi  and molds for a long time of about 840 years.
Revised:  It kept it from harm against insects, wood-rotting fungi , and molds for a long time of about 840 years.
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Original: ]] [[File:Parmigiano reggiano factory.jpg|250px|Parmigiano reggiano cheese  in a modern factory.
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Original: ]] [[File:Battery hens -Bastos, Sao Paulo, Brazil-31March2007.jpg|250px| Hens in a battery cage in Brazil, an example of intensive animal farming.
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Original:  1 in 3 people worldwide are employed in agriculture, yet it only contributes 3\% to global GDP.
Revised:  One in three people worldwide are employed in agriculture, yet it only contributes 3\% to global GDP.
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Original:  [[File:Meat packages in a Roman supermarket.jpg|Packaged meat in a supermarket  ]] Proactive guidance In 2020 researchers published projections and models of potential impacts of policy-dependent mechanisms of modulation, or lack thereof, of how, where, and what food is produced.
Revised:  [[File:Meat packages in a Roman supermarket.jpg|Packaged meat in a supermarket . ]] Proactive guidance In 2020 researchers published projections and models of potential impacts of policy-dependent mechanisms of modulation, or lack thereof, of how, where, and what food is produced.
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Original:  They analyzed policy-effects for specific regions or nations such as reduction of meat production and consumption, reductions in food loss and waste , increases in crop yields and international land-use planning.
Revised:  They analyzed policy-effects for specific regions or nations such as reduction of meat production and consumption, reductions in food waste and loss , increases in crop yields and international land-use planning.
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Original:  Trucks commonly distribute food products to commercial businesses and organizations .]] Retail With worldwide urbanization, food buying is increasingly removed from food production.
Revised:  Road transportation is often used in food distribution .]] Retail With worldwide urbanization, food buying is increasingly removed from food production.
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Original:  Labor and education [[File:Tartu Mill 04.jpg| Some equipment at Tartu Mill , the largest grain milling company in the Baltic states .
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Original:  Labor and education [[File:Tartu Mill 04.jpg| Some equipment at Tartu Mill , the largest grain milling company in the Baltic states .
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Original:  Modern food processing factories are often highly automated and need few workers .]] Until the last 100 years, agriculture was labor-intensive.
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Original:  In America in 1870, 70-80 percent of the US population was employed in agriculture.
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Original:  Other food sources fast food restaurant include aquaculture and fishing.
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Original:  Additionally, the system has been criticized by the assistant commissioner of the New York City Department of Health and Mental Hygiene as “poorly planned” and lacking qualified data analaysts to deal with the complicated medical issues addressed by the URL
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Original:  routine public health practice, and improved health outcomes and public health Improve the ability to detect emergency health-related threats by supporting the enhancement of systems to signal alerts for potential problems Increasing local and state jurisdictions participation in BioSense Advances in science and technology URL URL BioSense 2.0 By November 2011, the Redesigned BioSense (or BioSense 2.0)
Revised:  routine public health practice, and improved health outcomes and public health Improve the ability to detect emergency health-related threats by supporting the enhancement of systems to signal alerts for potential problems Increasing local and state jurisdictions participation in BioSense Advances in science and technology URL BioSense 2.0 By November 2011, the Redesigned BioSense (or BioSense 2.0)
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Original:  States that elect to use this utility will each have a secure "zone" that they control and can use to manage or share their syndromic surveillance information. URL
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Original:   It occurs across several phases, including prenatal development, puberty, and pregnancy.
Revised:  Breast image It occurs across several phases, including prenatal development, puberty, and pregnancy.
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Original:  Breast image It occurs across several phases, including prenatal development, puberty, and pregnancy.
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Original: The Sahel has long experienced a series of historic droughts , dating back to at least the 17th century.
Revised: The Sahel has long experienced a series of historic dnnnnkroughts , dating back to at least the 17th century.
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Original:  From 1990 until present rainfall returned to levels slightly below the 1898–1993 average, but year-to-year variability was high.
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Original:  Over time, this developed into a subculture in other areas, like the Cittaslow organisation for "slow cities . "  The "slow" epithet has subsequently been applied to a variety of activities and aspects of culture.
Revised:  Over time, this developed into a subculture in other areas, like the Cittaslow organisation for "slow cities " The "slow" epithet has subsequently been applied to a variety of activities and aspects of culture.
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