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Original:  Six DOC workers reside on Raoul Island  Rolien Elliot, DOC Area Manager for Warkworth says “A helicopter has been sent to pick up the DOC staff that are based on the island, five of whom have been accounted for.
Revised:  Six DOC workers reside on Raoul Island Rolien Elliot, DOC Area Manager for Warkworth said “A helicopter has been sent to pick up the DOC staff that are based on the island, five of whom have been accounted for.
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Original: The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) is making a emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8.21 am . Six DOC workers were living on Raoul Island at the time.
Revised: The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) began an emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8.21 am . Six DOC workers were living on Raoul Island at the time.
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Original: The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) is making a emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8.21 am . Six DOC workers were living on Raoul Island at the time.
Revised: The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) is making a emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8.21 AM . Six DOC workers were living on Raoul Island at the time.
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Original:  Rolien Elliot, DOC Area Manager for Warkworth said “A helicopter has been sent to pick up the DOC staff that are based on the island, five of whom have been accounted for.
Revised:  Rolien Elliot, DOC Area Manager for Warkworth , said, “A helicopter has been sent to pick up the DOC staff that are based on the island, five of whom have been accounted for.
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Original:  One staff member is missing after going on a routine mission to check the water temperature of the lake ….
Revised:  One staff member is missing after going on a routine mission to check the water temperature of the lake ....
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Original:  The last eruption occurred in 1964  when workers had to be evacuated because of the possibility of continuing activity.
Revised:  The last eruption occurred in 1964 , when workers had to be evacuated because of the possibility of continuing activity.
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Original:  It takes two days  sailing for a Navy frigate to reach Raoul Island from Auckland
Revised:  It takes two days ' sailing for a Navy frigate to reach Raoul Island from Auckland
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Original: The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) began an emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8.21 AM . Six DOC workers were living on Raoul Island at the time .
Revised: The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) began an emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8.21 AM . Six DOC workers were living on Raoul Island when it erupted .
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Original: Moss Burmester has won the first gold medal for New Zealand in the  Commonwealth Games, in Melbourne yesterday.
Revised: Moss Burmester won the first gold medal for New Zealand in the Commonwealth Games, in Melbourne yesterday.
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Original:  Burmester carried on with the NZ tradition of winning the final of the 200m men's butterfly.
Revised:  Burmester carried on the NZ tradition of winning the final of the 200m men's butterfly.
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Original:  His winning time was 1min 56.64 sec  , a best by 0.25 sec , and putting him in the top ten in the world
Revised:  His winning time was 1min 56.64 sec . , a best by 0.25 sec , and putting him in the top ten in the world
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Original:  His winning time was 1min 56.64 sec  , a best by 0.25 sec , and putting him in the top ten in the world
Revised:  His winning time was 1min 56.64 sec , a best by 0.25 sec ., putting him in the top ten in the world
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Original: Acting police Deputy Commissioner, Roger Carson, says police did find a prima facie case that;
Revised: Acting police Deputy Commissioner, Roger Carson, said yesterday, that police did find a prima facie case that;
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Original: Acting police Deputy Commissioner, Roger Carson, said yesterday , that police did find a prima facie case that ;
Revised: Acting police Deputy Commissioner, Roger Carson, said yesterday that police did find a prima facie case that ;
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Original: Acting police Deputy Commissioner, Roger Carson, said yesterday , that police did find a prima facie case that ;
Revised: Acting police Deputy Commissioner, Roger Carson, said yesterday , that police did find a prima facie case that 
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Original:  Over the alleged case of over-spending on the taxpayer-funded pledge cards, police say that there was insufficient evidence to show that an offence under section 214b of the Electoral Act had been committed.
Revised:  In the alleged case of over-spending on the taxpayer-funded pledge cards, police say that there was insufficient evidence to show that an offence under section 214b of the Electoral Act had been committed.
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Original:  Over the alleged case of over-spending on the taxpayer-funded pledge cards, police say that there was insufficient evidence to show that an offence under section 214b of the Electoral Act had been committed.
Revised:  Over the alleged case of over-spending on taxpayer-funded pledge cards, police say that there was insufficient evidence to show that an offence under section 214b of the Electoral Act had been committed.
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Original:  Section 214b sets the maximum amount of that parties may spent on election expenses.
Revised:  Section 214b sets the maximum amount that parties may spent on election expenses.
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Original:  The New Zealand Electoral Commission referred the Labour Party to the police, in February for allegedly overspending NZ$418,603 in last year's general election.
Revised:  The New Zealand Electoral Commission referred the Labour Party to the police, for allegedly overspending NZ$418,603 in last year's general election.
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Original: Blizzards wreak havoc January 24, 2005 In the northeast states of America, flurries of snow have created mayhem as they spread and cover people with snow and ice.
Revised: Blizzard wreaks havoc January 24, 2005 In the northeast states of America, flurries of snow have created mayhem as they spread and cover people with snow and ice.
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Original: Blizzards wreak havoc January 24, 2005 In the northeast states of America, flurries of snow have created mayhem as they spread and cover people with snow and ice.
Revised: Blizzards wreak havoc January 24, 2005 In the northeastern corner of the USA, snowstorms have created mayhem as they spread and cover people with snow and ice.
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Original: Blizzards wreak havoc January 24, 2005 In the northeast states of America, flurries of snow have created mayhem as they spread and cover people with snow and ice.
Revised: Blizzards wreak havoc January 24, 2005 In the northeast states of America, flurries of snow have created mayhem as they cover the region with snow and ice.
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Original:  Many cold fronts, which lead to theses storms, have spread from the south of the United States to areas like Massachusetts, Rhode Island and New Jersey, just to name the few states with serious blizzard emergancies.
Revised:  Several cold fronts, which lead to theses storms, have spread from the south of the United States to areas like Massachusetts, Rhode Island and New Jersey, just to name the few states with serious blizzard emergancies.
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Original:  Many cold fronts, which lead to theses storms, have spread from the south of the United States to areas like Massachusetts, Rhode Island and New Jersey, just to name the few states with serious blizzard emergancies.
Revised:  Many cold fronts, which lead to these storms, have spread from the south of the United States to areas like Massachusetts, Rhode Island and New Jersey, just to name the few states with serious blizzard emergancies.
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Original:  Speaking of air travel, the blizzards have not only recked ground transport, but have disrupted thousands of flights.
Revised:  The blizzards have not only recked ground transport, but have disrupted thousands of flights.
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Original:  Speaking of air travel, the blizzards have not only recked ground transport, but have disrupted thousands of flights.
Revised:  Speaking of air travel, the blizzards have not only wrecked ground transport, but have disrupted thousands of flights.
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Original:  These blizzards are quite a surprise , even by New England standards.
Revised:  This blizzard was extreme , even by New England standards.
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Original:  The blizzard even hit Southern states and left four inches of snow in Washington DC.
Revised:  The blizzard also hit Southern states and left four inches of snow in Washington DC.
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Original:  She said that when staff went to look for their colleague , where he was thought to be  they “had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.” "There's been about five hectares of native bush cleared and a lot of mud and evidence of boulders and rocks that have been thrown out of the crater itself," the helicopter pilot John Funnell said to One News  Related Wikinew
Revised:  She said that when two of the others went to look for their colleague , where he was thought to be they “had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.” "There's been about five hectares of native bush cleared and a lot of mud and evidence of boulders and rocks that have been thrown out of the crater itself," the helicopter pilot John Funnell said to One News Related Wikinew
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Original:  She said that when staff went to look for their colleague , where he was thought to be  they “had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.” "There's been about five hectares of native bush cleared and a lot of mud and evidence of boulders and rocks that have been thrown out of the crater itself," the helicopter pilot John Funnell said to One News  Related Wikinew
Revised:  She said that when staff went to look for their colleague where he was thought to be they “had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.” "There's been about five hectares of native bush cleared and a lot of mud and evidence of boulders and rocks that have been thrown out of the crater itself," the helicopter pilot John Funnell said to One News Related Wikinew
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Original:  She said that when staff went to look for their colleague , where he was thought to be  they “had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.” "There's been about five hectares of native bush cleared and a lot of mud and evidence of boulders and rocks that have been thrown out of the crater itself," the helicopter pilot John Funnell said to One News  Related Wikinew
Revised:  She said that when staff went to look for their colleague , where he was thought to be , they “had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.” "There's been about five hectares of native bush cleared and a lot of mud and evidence of boulders and rocks that have been thrown out of the crater itself," the helicopter pilot John Funnell said to One News Related Wikinew
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Original:  She said that when staff went to look for their colleague , where he was thought to be  they “had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.” "There's been about five hectares of native bush cleared and a lot of mud and evidence of boulders and rocks that have been thrown out of the crater itself," the helicopter pilot John Funnell said to One News  Related Wikinew
Revised:  She said that when staff went to look for their colleague , where he was thought to be they “had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.” "There's been about five hectares of native bush cleared and a lot of mud and evidence of boulders and rocks that have been thrown out of the crater itself," the helicopter pilot John Funnell said to One News . Related Wikinew
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Original: Wang Jue, a Chinese nurse appearing on a disturbing internet video stomping a cat with her high heel shoes, gave herself up to authorities after bloggers and some print media started a campaign to trackback the recording.
Revised: Wang Jue, a Chinese nurse appearing on a disturbing internet video stomping a cat with her high-heel shoes, gave herself up to authorities after bloggers and some print media started a campaign to trackback the recording.
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Original: Wang Jue, a Chinese nurse appearing on a disturbing internet video stomping a cat with her high heel shoes, gave herself up to authorities after bloggers and some print media started a campaign to trackback the recording.
Revised: Wang Jue, a Chinese nurse appearing on a disturbing internet video stomping a cat with her high heel shoes, gave herself up to authorities after bloggers and some print media started a campaign to trace back the recording.
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Original:  At the beginning, she was labeled as the kitten killer of Hangzhou, because it was believed she was from there , but some internauts recognized an island at at northern Heilongjiang province.
Revised:  At the beginning, she was labeled as the kitten killer of Hangzhou, because it was believed she was from there ; but some internauts recognized an island at at northern Heilongjiang province.
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Original:  At the beginning, she was labeled as the kitten killer of Hangzhou, because it was believed she was from there , but some internauts recognized an island at at northern Heilongjiang province.
Revised:  At the beginning, she was labeled as the kitten killer of Hangzhou, because it was believed she was from there , but some internauts recognized an island at northern Heilongjiang province.
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Original:  Wang posted an apology on  Luobei city government official website.
Revised:  Wang posted an apology on the Luobei city government official website.
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Original:  The cameraman, a provincial TV employee, and her lost their jobs when internauts found out their identities.
Revised:  The cameraman, a provincial TV employee, and she lost their jobs when internauts found out their identities.
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Original:  The cameraman, a provincial TV employee, and her lost their jobs when internauts found out their identities.
Revised:  The cameraman, a provincial TV employee, and her lost their jobs when internauts discovered their identities.
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Original:  Nevertheless, since China lacks of laws against cruelty on animals, Wang and the cameraman might be freed soon.
Revised:  Nevertheless, since China lacks of laws against cruelty to animals, Wang and the cameraman might be freed soon.
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Original:  At the beginning, she was labeled as the kitten killer of Hangzhou, because it was believed she was from there;
Revised:  In the beginning, she was labeled as the kitten killer of Hangzhou, because it was believed she was from there;
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Original:  but some internauts recognized an island at northern Heilongjiang province.
Revised:  but some internauts recognized an island in northern Heilongjiang province.
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Original:  Nevertheless, since China lacks of laws against cruelty to animals, Wang and the cameraman might be freed soon.
Revised:  Nevertheless, since China lacks laws against cruelty to animals, Wang and the cameraman might be freed soon.
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Original: New Zealand has won their third consecutive gold medal in Rugby sevens after beating England last night 29-21.
Revised: New Zealand has won its third consecutive gold medal in Rugby sevens after beating England last night 29-21.
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Original:  The members of the winning New Zealand seven's team were: Soseni Anisi, Joshua Blackie, Tamati Ellison, Nigel Hunt, Tafai Ioasa, Cory Jane, Tenerau Latimer, Liam Messam, Lote Raikabula, Amasio Raoma, Alando Soakai and Onosai Tololima-Auva'a
Revised:  The members of the winning New Zealand sevens team were: Soseni Anisi, Joshua Blackie, Tamati Ellison, Nigel Hunt, Tafai Ioasa, Cory Jane, Tenerau Latimer, Liam Messam, Lote Raikabula, Amasio Raoma, Alando Soakai and Onosai Tololima-Auva'a
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Original: January 24, 2005|Iraq Sami Mohammad Ali Said al-Jaaf, also known as Abu Omar al-Kurdi, accused of many bombings, has said to have been captured by US and Iraqi security forces.
Revised:  Sami Mohammad Ali Said al-Jaaf, also known as Abu Omar al-Kurdi, accused of many bombings, has said to have been captured by US and Iraqi security forces.
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Original:  He was arrested on the 15th of January, but his arrest has not been revealed until now. al-Jaaf was said to have been a threat to securite because of his ties to the militant group Zarqawi and his previous criminal record.
Revised:  He was arrested on the 15th of January, but his arrest has not been revealed until now. Al-Jaaf was said to have been a threat to securite because of his ties to the militant group Zarqawi and his previous criminal record.
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Original: Russian president Vladimir Putin promised on thursday that Russia will continue to increase energy production and making nuclear energy more accessible.
Revised: Russian president Vladimir Putin promised on Thursday that Russia will continue to increase energy production and making nuclear energy more accessible.
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Original:  "Russian companies are already realizing projects that have strategic importance for a real strengthening of global energy security  " Putin said.
Revised:  "Russian companies are already realizing projects that have strategic importance for a real strengthening of global energy security , " Putin said.
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Original:  Putin spoke of the development of the Shtokman field, which contains 3 trillion cubic meters of gas, gas and oil pipelines such as the ones under the Baltic Sea  and a pipeline from eastern Siberia to the Pacific.
Revised:  Putin spoke of the development of the Shtokman field, which contains 3 trillion cubic meters of gas, oil and gas pipelines such as the ones under the Baltic Sea and a pipeline from eastern Siberia to the Pacific.
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Original:  Putin spoke of the development of the Shtokman field, which contains 3 trillion cubic meters of gas, gas and oil pipelines such as the ones under the Baltic Sea  and a pipeline from eastern Siberia to the Pacific.
Revised:  Putin spoke of the development of the Shtokman field, which contains 3 trillion cubic meters of gas, gas and oil pipelines such as the ones under the Baltic Sea , and a pipeline from eastern Siberia to the Pacific.
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Original:  Many fear however that the current pipeline capacity will not be able to keep pace with demand . Putin made efforts to ease these fearsrefering to the pipeline projects as "the first in a series that world markets would benefit from soon."
Revised:  Putin's remarks addressed concerns the current pipeline capacity will not be able to keep pace with demand . Putin made efforts to ease these fearsrefering to the pipeline projects as "the first in a series that world markets would benefit from soon."
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Original:  Many fear however that the current pipeline capacity will not be able to keep pace with demand . Putin made efforts to ease these fearsrefering to the pipeline projects as "the first in a series that world markets would benefit from soon."
Revised:  Many fear however that the current pipeline capacity will not be able to keep pace with demand , saying the projects are "the first in a series that world markets would benefit from soon."
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Original:  Putin also said that the Duma will pass laws soon to clear up the role of foreign investment in future projects.
Revised:  Putin also said that the Duma will soon pass laws to clarify the role of foreign investment in future projects.
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Original:  Gazprom, a russian energy company that the russian government has the majority stake in, cut supplies to Ukraine in January effecting supply in several european countries.
Revised:  Gazprom, a russian energy company that the government has the majority stake in, cut supplies to Ukraine in January effecting supply in several european countries.
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Original:  Gazprom, a russian energy company that the russian government has the majority stake in, cut supplies to Ukraine in January effecting supply in several european countries.
Revised:  Gazprom, a russian energy company that the russian government has the majority stake in, cut supplies to Ukraine in January affecting supply in several european countries.
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Original:  25 percent of the EU's gas supply much of which comes from Russia  by way of the Ukraine.
Revised:  25 percent of the EU's gas supply comes from Russia by way of the Ukraine.
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Original:  25 percent of the EU's gas supply much of which comes from Russia  by way of the Ukraine.
Revised:  25 percent of the EU's gas supply much of which comes from Russia , much of it by way of the Ukraine.
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Original:  After the meeting on thursday US energy secretary Samuel Bodman said “We are hopeful of a very substantial rebirth of the global nuclear industry.
Revised:  After the meeting on Thursday US energy secretary Samuel Bodman said “We are hopeful of a very substantial rebirth of the global nuclear industry.
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Original: Some have been wary of the russian government's growing role in the country's energy market.
Revised: Some have been wary of the Russian government's growing role in the country's energy market.
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Original:  Gazprom, a russian energy company that the government has the majority stake in, cut supplies to Ukraine in January affecting supply in several european countries.
Revised:  Gazprom, a Russian energy company that the government has the majority stake in, cut supplies to Ukraine in January affecting supply in several european countries.
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Original: Russian president Vladimir Putin promised on Thursday that Russia will continue to increase energy production and making nuclear energy more accessible.
Revised: Russian president Vladimir Putin promised on Thursday that Russia will continue to increase energy production and to make nuclear energy more accessible.
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Original:  "Russian companies are already realizing projects that have strategic importance for a real strengthening of global energy security," Putin said.
Revised:  "Russian companies are already completing projects that have strategic importance for a real strengthening of global energy security," Putin said.
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