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Original:  In an effort to divert the criticism of his administrqation 's decision to go to war with Iraq, Bush pointed out that some Democrats viewed the same intelligence and came to similar conclusions.
Revised:  In an effort to divert the criticism of his administration 's decision to go to war with Iraq, Bush pointed out that some Democrats viewed the same intelligence and came to similar conclusions.
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Original:  In an effort to divert the criticism of his administrqation 's decision to go to war with Iraq, Bush pointed out that some Democrats viewed the same intelligence and came to similar conclusions.
Revised:  In an effort to divert the criticism of his administrqation 's decision to go to war with Iraq, Bush said that some Democrats viewed the same intelligence and came to similar conclusions.
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Original: President Bush accused critics of the Iraq war of rewriting history and distorting the events that led to the U.S. invasion.
Revised: President Bush accused critics of the Iraq War of rewriting history and distorting the events that led to the U.S. invasion.
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Original:  At the same time, the Senate Intelligence Committe is making progress toward an agreement on how to implement 'phase two' of the Iraq WMD investigation set up to investigate how administration officals used the intelligence information available in the run-up of the Iraq war.
Revised:  At the same time, the Senate Intelligence Committee is making progress toward an agreement on how to implement 'phase two' of the Iraq WMD investigation set up to investigate how administration officals used the intelligence information available in the run-up of the Iraq war.
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Original:  He received a four-month suspended sentence for shaking his seven-month old son to death to stop him from crying
Revised:  He received a four-month suspended sentence for his seven-month old son to death to stop him from crying
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Original:  He received a four-month suspended sentence for shaking his seven-month old son to death to stop him from crying
Revised:  He received a four-month suspended sentence for shaking his seven-month old son to stop him from crying
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Original: According to Swiss police, Loretan was climbing with a client to the summit of , a 4,043 meter peak in the , when both fell for unknown reasons at around 3,800 metres.
Revised: According to Swiss police, Loretan was climbing with a client to the summit of , a 4,043 meter peak in the , when both fell for unknown reasons from a height of around 3,800 metres.
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Original: He added, "I now want to share this passion more with others, and it’s because of this that being a mountain guide is a good profession because you can help someone who dreams about climbing mountains.
Revised: He added, "I now want to share this passion more with others, and it’s because of this that being a is a good profession because you can help someone who dreams about climbing mountains.
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Original:  This is the first time in four years United has increased the amount of flight attendants it employs. image:United_Airlines_aircraft_taking_off_at_Schiphol_Airport.jpg|200px|actual size
Revised:  This is the first time in four years United has increased the amount of flight attendants it employs. 
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Original:  29-year-old Andries Gamba Msimang, from Mozambique, got free on Friday.
Revised:  29-year-old Andries Gamba Msimang, from Mozambique, absconded on Friday.
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Original: The volcano Galeras could have an eruption at any moment according to Julian Villaruel, director of the Colombian Institute of Geology and Mines (Ingeominas).
Revised: The Galeras volcano could have an eruption at any moment according to Julian Villaruel, director of the Colombian Institute of Geology and Mines (Ingeominas).
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Original:  The spokesman for the Volcanoes and Seismologic Observatory of Pasto, Colombia, explained that the Volcano Galeras has registered a level two activity in a scale of 1 to 4, which means that an eruption is likely to happen in days or weeks.
Revised:  The spokesman for the Volcanoes and Seismologic Observatory of Pasto, Colombia, explained that the Galeras volcano has registered a level two activity in a scale of 1 to 4, which means that an eruption is likely to happen in days or weeks.
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Original: He declared that some of the measurements taken have been analyses by scientific institutions in the US which have confirmed the likelihood of the occurrence of this phenomenon.
Revised: He declared that some of the measurements taken have been analyzed by scientific institutions in the US which have confirmed the likelihood of the occurrence of this phenomenon.
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Original:  The observatory and the local committee for the prevention and reduction of disasters (CREPAD) will continues to keep a watchful eye on the behavior of the volcano in order to instruct the residents about the risks and the evacuation routes in case of eruption.
Revised:  The observatory and the local committee for the prevention and reduction of disasters (CREPAD) will continue to keep a watchful eye on the behavior of the volcano in order to instruct the residents about the risks and the evacuation routes in case of eruption.
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Original:  The last time this type of activity was registered was in 2004.
Revised:  The last time it registered some activity was was in 2004.
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Original:  The last time it registered some activity was was in 2004.
Revised:  The last time it registered some activity was in 2004.
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Original:  I seem to be able to find the ones without the SAFER barrier.    
Revised:  I seem to be able to find the ones without the SAFER barrier. " 
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Original: Busch, who lead 235 laps, was over one second ahead of his teammate at the conclusion of the race. finished third, ahead of and . , , , and followed in the next four positions. could only manage a tenth place finish.
Revised: Busch, who led 235 laps, was over one second ahead of his teammate at the conclusion of the race. finished third, ahead of and . , , , and followed in the next four positions. could only manage a tenth place finish.
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Original:  During the beginning of the race, collided into , prompting Montoya to crash into the .
Revised:  During the race, collided into , prompting Montoya to crash into the .
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Original:  Follwing the accident, Newman told his crew, "I can't believe they [NASCAR] aren't going to black flag that 42 car. ...
Revised:  Following the accident, Newman told his crew, "I can't believe they [NASCAR] aren't going to black flag that 42 car. ...
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Original:  64 laps later, a nine car accident, involving , , and six other drivers occured .
Revised:  64 laps later, a nine car accident, involving , , and six other drivers occurred .
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Original:  On lap 236, Montoya collided back into Newman as "payback" . Following the race, Edwards remains leader with 335 points.
Revised:  On lap 236, Montoya collided back into Newman . Following the race, Edwards remains leader with 335 points.
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Original:  Bowyer, Newman, Kenseth, and Stewart round out the top-ten positions for the Drivers' Champoinship .
Revised:  Bowyer, Newman, Kenseth, and Stewart round out the top-ten positions for the Drivers' Championship .
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Original: Japan will kill over 900 minke whales and ten fin whales during the next six months as part of its whaling program, JAPRA II, marking a sharp escalation in Japan’s whaling activities.
Revised: Japan plans to kill over 900 minke whales and ten fin whales during the next six months as part of its whaling program, JAPRA II, marking a sharp escalation in Japan’s whaling activities.
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Original: Japan plans to kill over 900 minke whales and ten fin whales during the next six months as part of its whaling program, JAPRA II, marking a sharp escalation in Japan ’ s whaling activities.
Revised: Japan plans to kill over 900 minke whales and ten fin whales during the next six months as part of its whaling program, JAPRA II, marking a sharp escalation in Japan ' s whaling activities.
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Original:  "It is a dark day for some of the world ’ s most magnificent creatures.
Revised:  "It is a dark day for some of the world ' s most magnificent creatures.
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Original:  Let ’ s be under no illusion—this is commercial whaling in disguise.
Revised:  Let ' s be under no illusion—this is commercial whaling in disguise.
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Original: The Japanese whaling fleet is reportedly heading into the seas around Antartica , drawing widespread condemnation from campaigners.
Revised: The Japanese whaling fleet is reportedly heading into the seas around Antarctica , drawing widespread condemnation from campaigners.
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Original:  In December, the Sea Shepherd Conservation Society will engage the Japanese whaling fleet in the Southern Ocean Whale Sanctuary.
Revised:  In December, the will engage the Japanese whaling fleet in the Southern Ocean Whale Sanctuary.
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Original:  The move follows litigation being brought against the company for the software which it is alleged opens up Microsoft Windows to malicious attacks   .
Revised:  The move follows litigation being brought against the company for the software which it is alleged opens up Microsoft Windows to malicious attacks . .
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Original: In an ironic turn of events, it now appears that Sony's software violates the copyright of the popular LAME mp3 player, which is distributed under the LGPL . In the past, German courts have forced companies to release their source code to the public when it was based upon software distributed under such a license.
Revised: In an ironic turn of events, it now appears that Sony's software violates the copyright of the popular LAME mp3 player, which is distributed under a public license . In the past, German courts have forced companies to release their source code to the public when it was based upon software distributed under such a license.
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Original:  However, the terms of the LGPL will permit Sony to distribute portion in linkable object code format.
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Original:  His death has come on the same day as the first session of the 2011 Snooker World Fina 
Revised:  His death has come on the same day as the first session of the 2011 Snooker World Final. 
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Original: His wife  Jean commented on her husbands deathsaying "His health had been deteriorating for the last 10 weeks.
Revised: His wife , Jean commented on her husbands deathsaying "His health had been deteriorating for the last 10 weeks.
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Original: His wife  Jean commented on her husbands deathsaying "His health had been deteriorating for the last 10 weeks.
Revised: His wife Jean commented on his death. She said "His health had been deteriorating for the last 10 weeks.
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Original:  He still loves snooker and was watching it on TV  
Revised:  He still loves snooker and was watching it on TV ." 
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Original:  Lowe, who received the nickname "Whispering Ted" due to his broadcasting style commentated on many of snooker's biggest matches including the 1985 World Final between Steve Davis and Dennis Taylor.
Revised:  Lowe, who received the nickname "Whispering Ted" due to his broadcasting style commentated on many of snooker's biggest events including the 1985 World Final between Steve Davis and Dennis Taylor.
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Original:  I loved him dearly  
Revised:  I loved him dearly ." 
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Original:  During a game he said "He's going for the pink, and for those of you with black-and-white sets, the yellow is behind the blue 
Revised:  During a game he said "He's going for the pink, and for those of you with black-and-white sets, the yellow is behind the blue .
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Original: Aswell as commentating on snooker tournaments Lowe hosted the BBC television programme Pot Black.
Revised: As well as commentating on snooker tournaments Lowe hosted the BBC television programme Pot Black.
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Original:  Lowe is also remembered by viewers for his quote after colour television's started to appear.
Revised:  Lowe is also remembered by viewers for his quote after colour televisions started to appear.
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Original: Lowe started his broadcasting career in the 1940's British snooker commentator has died at the age of 90.
Revised: Lowe started his broadcasting career in the 1940s British snooker commentator has died at the age of 90.
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Original:  CIA director notified US legislators Sunday about the news.
Revised:  CIA director notified U.S. legislators Sunday about the news.
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Original:  "I can report to the American people and to the world, that the US has conducted an operation that killed Osama bin Laden," Obama said.
Revised:  "I can report to the American people and to the world, that the U.S. has conducted an operation that killed Osama bin Laden," Obama said.
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Original: 30 year old Mike, who grew up in a small town in Saskatchewan, currently lives in Los Angelas with his wife, American swimmer Lindsay Benko.
Revised: 30 year old Mike, who grew up in a small town in Saskatchewan, currently lives in Los Angeles with his wife, American swimmer Lindsay Benko.
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Original:  America will be our second target," a spokesman for Tehrik-i-Taliban Pakistan said.
Revised:  America will be our second target," a spokesman for said.
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Original:  U.S. officials warned Americans to ensure they were careful in traveling to unspecified countries where their could be violent retaliatory attacks after , the director of the CIA, said al-Qaeda would likely mount a retaliation after the death of bin Laden . "Though bin Laden is dead, al-Qaeda is not," Panetta said.
Revised:  U.S. officials warned Americans to ensure they were careful in traveling to unspecified countries where there could be violent retaliatory attacks after , the director of the CIA, said al-Qaeda would likely mount a retaliation after the death of bin Laden . "Though bin Laden is dead, al-Qaeda is not," Panetta said.
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Original:  U.S. officials warned Americans to ensure they were careful in traveling to unspecified countries where their could be violent retaliatory attacks after , the director of the CIA, said al-Qaeda would likely mount a retaliation after the death of bin Laden . "Though bin Laden is dead, al-Qaeda is not," Panetta said.
Revised:  U.S. officials warned Americans to ensure they were careful in traveling to unspecified countries where their could be violent retaliatory attacks . "Though bin Laden is dead, al-Qaeda is not," Panetta said.
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Original:  shortly afterwards  crowds began celebrating outside the and , where the twin towers of collapsed after the , which al-Qaeda planned .
Revised:  shortly afterwards , crowds began celebrating outside the and , where the twin towers of collapsed after the , which al-Qaeda planned .
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Original:  , a former CIA intelligence agent, has warned  it is likely al-Qaeda has the resources to mount an attack as deadly as 9/11 again because U.S. officials have done "very little" to prevent terrorist groups carrying weapons over borders.
Revised:  , a former CIA intelligence agent, has warned that it is likely al-Qaeda has the resources to mount an attack as deadly as 9/11 again because U.S. officials have done "very little" to prevent terrorist groups carrying weapons over borders.
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Original:  , a former CIA intelligence agent, has warned  it is likely al-Qaeda has the resources to mount an attack as deadly as 9/11 again because U.S. officials have done "very little" to prevent terrorist groups carrying weapons over borders.
Revised:  , a former CIA intelligence agent, has warned it is likely al-Qaeda has the resources to mount an attack as deadly as 9/11 again because U.S. officials have done "very little" to prevent terrorist groups carrying weapons across its borders.
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Original:  The warning from the Scheur and the CIA came shortly after the Pakistani Taliban said they would attack Pakistani and American targets.
Revised:  The warning from Scheuer and the CIA came shortly after the Pakistani Taliban said they would attack Pakistani and American targets.
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Original: The has threatened a revenge attack on the U.S. and senior Pakistani politicians after the killing of Osama bin Laden , while , the director of the CIA, is warning that al-Qaeda will "almost certainly" attempt an attack on the U.S. to avenge their leader.
Revised: The has threatened a revenge attack on the U.S. and senior Pakistani politicians after the killing of Osama bin Laden as , the director of the CIA, is warning that al-Qaeda will "almost certainly" attempt an attack on the U.S. to avenge their leader.
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Original: The has threatened a revenge attack on the U.S. and senior Pakistani politicians after the killing of Osama bin Laden , while , the director of the CIA, is warning that al-Qaeda will "almost certainly" attempt an attack on the U.S. to avenge their leader.
Revised: The has threatened a revenge attack on the U.S. and senior Pakistani politicians after the killing of Osama bin Laden , while , the director of the CIA, warns al-Qaeda will "almost certainly" attempt an attack on the U.S. to avenge their leader.
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Original:  , a former CIA intelligence agent, has warned that it is likely al-Qaeda has the resources to mount an attack as deadly as 9/11 again because U.S. officials have done "very little" to prevent terrorist groups carrying weapons across its borders.
Revised:  , a former CIA intelligence agent, has warned it is likely al-Qaeda has the resources to mount an attack as deadly as 9/11 again because U.S. officials have done "very little" to prevent terrorist groups carrying weapons across its borders.
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Original:  shortly afterwards, crowds began celebrating outside the and , where the twin towers of collapsed after the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001 which have been attributed to bin Laden.
Revised:  shortly afterwards, crowds began celebrating outside the and , where the twin towers of collapsed after the attacks of September 11, 2001 which have been attributed to bin Laden.
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Original:  "Three detainees in Villawood remain on voluntary starvation," an immigration department spokesman said.
Revised: Image:Villawood.jpg "Three detainees in Villawood remain on voluntary starvation," an immigration department spokesman said.
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Original:  "What the hunger strike highlights is why the misery of mandatory detention continues   .
Revised:  "What the hunger strike highlights is why the misery of mandatory detention continues ." .
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Original:  250px|Villawood Detention Centre in Sydney They said they had been persecuted by the communist regime in China and had come to Australia seeking protection.
Revised:  250px|Villawood Detention Centre in Sydney They said they had been persecuted by the communist regime in China and came to Australia seeking protection.
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Original:  The remaining man in hospital is one of the three who has agreed to end his protest.
Revised:  The remaining man in hospital is one of the three has ended his protest.
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Original:  The men make the point that they feel their lives are being destroyed by mandatory detention and the time that they're having to spend inside Villawood ." Peter Job from the Victorian Greens has expressed grave concern for the remaining three detainees continuing their hunger strike past its twenty-sixth day.
Revised:  The men make the point that they feel their lives are being destroyed by mandatory detention ." Peter Job from the Victorian Greens has expressed grave concern for the remaining three detainees continuing their hunger strike past its twenty-sixth day.
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Original:  Mr Job said, " asylum seekers who maintain they have strong claims should have their cases re-heard.
Revised:  " asylum seekers who maintain they have strong claims should have their cases re-heard.
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Original:  Mr Job said, " asylum seekers who maintain they have strong claims should have their cases re-heard.
Revised:  Mr Job said, " Asylum seekers who maintain they have strong claims should have their cases re-heard.
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Original:  Given the obviously harmful nature of long term detention they should be allowed to live in the community while this takes place .
Revised:  Given the obviously harmful nature of long term detention they should be allowed to live in the community while this takes place ," said Mr Job
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Original:  The men began their hunger strike on October 20 to protest Australia's mandatory detention policy.
Revised:  The men began their hunger strike on October 20 to protest Australia's Mandatory Detention policy.
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Original:  The remaining man in hospital is one of the three has ended his protest.
Revised:  The remaining man in hospital has ended his protest.
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Original: British prime minister David Cameron said "This news will be welcomed right across our country.
Revised: British Prime Minister David Cameron said "This news will be welcomed right across our country.
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Original:  Indeed, we'll have to be particularly vigilant in the weeks ahead, but it is, I believe, a massive step forward." while Silvio Berlusconi, the Italian prime minster released a statement saying "This is a great outcome in the fight against evil, in the fight against terrorism, a great outcome for the United States and for all democracies"
Revised:  Indeed, we'll have to be particularly vigilant in the weeks ahead, but it is, I believe, a massive step forward." while Silvio Berlusconi, the Italian Prime Minster released a statement saying "This is a great outcome in the fight against evil, in the fight against terrorism, a great outcome for the United States and for all democracies"
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Original:  Indeed, we'll have to be particularly vigilant in the weeks ahead, but it is, I believe, a massive step forward." while Silvio Berlusconi, the Italian Prime Minster released a statement saying "This is a great outcome in the fight against evil, in the fight against terrorism, a great outcome for the United States and for all democracies"  
Revised:  Indeed, we'll have to be particularly vigilant in the weeks ahead, but it is, I believe, a massive step forward." while Silvio Berlusconi, the Italian Prime Minster released a statement saying "This is a great outcome in the fight against evil, in the fight against terrorism, a great outcome for the United States and for all democracies" . 
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Original:  Chinese spokeswoman Jiang Yu said "China has taken note of the announcement ," Jiang said, "We believe the death of Osama bin Laden is a milestone and a positive development for the international anti-terrorism efforts."
Revised:  Chinese spokeswoman Jiang Yu said "China has taken note of the announcement . "We believe the death of Osama bin Laden is a milestone and a positive development for the international anti-terrorism efforts."
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Original: Bin Laden was killed by US forces in Pakistan Leaders and officals around the world have been reacting to the announcment that Osama bin Laden has been killed during a US military operation in Pakistan.
Revised: Bin Laden was killed by US forces in Pakistan Leaders and officals around the world have had varied reactions to the announcement that Osama bin Laden has been killed during a US military operation in Pakistan.
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