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Original:  "Sometimes, as in the case of Google Chrome, this means that the legal terms for a specific product may include terms that don't apply well to the use of that product," said the spokesperson, when describing the effect of copying EULA's . A similar controversy occurred last year with Google Docs, which originally gave Google similar rights  
Revised:  "Sometimes, as in the case of Google Chrome, this means that the legal terms for a specific product may include terms that don't apply well to the use of that product," said the spokesperson, when describing the effect of copying EULA's . A similar controversy occurred last year with Google Docs, which originally gave Google similar rights Related new
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Original: A spokesperson for Google has said that the claim was originally there due to a mistake.
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Original: A spokesperson for Google has claimed that the text was inserted there due to a mistake.
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Original:  Before the announcement at noon, it was leaked and confirmed that Palin was indeed McCain's choice as a | . The Palin selection was hailed by conservatives who pointed to the candidate's pro-life record, executive experience and record of "fighting corruption."
Revised:  Before the announcement at noon, it was leaked and confirmed that Palin was indeed McCain's choice as a running mate . The Palin selection was hailed by conservatives who pointed to the candidate's pro-life record, executive experience and record of "fighting corruption."
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Original: August 2008 in the United States presidential election saw the emergence of two politicans selected to serve as their party's vice presidential nominees.
Revised: August 2008 in the United States presidential election saw the emergence of two politicians selected to serve as their party's vice presidential nominees.
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Original:  The event was meant as a “ third party convention for the conservatives—the real conservatives.
Revised:  The event was meant as a " third party convention for the conservatives—the real conservatives.
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Original:  ” Attending the protests were Constitution Party nominee Chuck Baldwin, Libertarian Party nominee Bob Barr, Independent candidate Alan Keyes and former Republican Party presidential candidate Congressman Tom Tancredo.
Revised:  " Attending the protests were Constitution Party nominee Chuck Baldwin, Libertarian Party nominee Bob Barr, Independent candidate Alan Keyes and former Republican Party presidential candidate Congressman Tom Tancredo.
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Original: August 2008 in the United States  saw the emergence of two politicians selected to serve as their party's nominees.
Revised: August 2008 in the United States presidential election saw the emergence of two politicians selected to serve as their party's nominees.
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Original:  The was held and campaign activities increased until a looming storm caused  to delay and reshuffle their . Republicans The took advantage of a fresh new series of ads that cast Barack Obama as a "celebrity."
Revised:  The was held and campaign activities increased until a looming storm caused Republicans to delay and reshuffle their . Republicans The took advantage of a fresh new series of ads that cast Barack Obama as a "celebrity."
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Original:  According to the The New York Times, the drop is the largest since June of this year, but an expected announcement Friday of August unemployment data could cause the index to rise  
Revised:  According to the The New York Times, the drop is the largest since June of this year, but an expected announcement Friday of August unemployment data could cause the index to rise . 
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Original: CNNMoney.com points to the rise in the price of Treasury bonds as a reaction to data released Wednesday that the American economy would continue to be slow in 2009.
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Original:  This is the first rise in the number of jobs in several months  
Revised:  This is the first rise in the number of jobs in several months . 
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Original:  It showed that women were capable of doing what had hitherto been a man's occupation   .
Revised:  It showed that women were capable of doing what had hitherto been a man's occupation ." .
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Original:  This is why the organization presented here with the award in 1976.
Revised:  This is why the organization presented her with the award in 1976.
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Original:  These regions are SW Scotland, Lothian & Borders, Northern Ireland, Wales, North West England, North East England, Yorkshire & Humber, the West Midlands, the East Midlands, South West England and London & South East England   
Revised:  These regions are SW Scotland, Lothian & Borders, Northern Ireland, Wales, North West England, North East England, Yorkshire & Humber, the West Midlands, the East Midlands, South West England and London & South East England . 
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Original: Much of the UK was placed on flood alert The UK Government's weather agency, the Met Office  has put much of the UK on flood alert with severe weather warnings for the majority of England and Wales and much of Northern Ireland.
Revised: Much of the UK was placed on flood alert The United Kingdom's government weather agency, the Met Office has put much of the UK on flood alert with severe weather warnings for the majority of England and Wales and much of Northern Ireland.
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Original: Much of the UK was placed on flood alert The UK Government's weather agency, the Met Office  has put much of the UK on flood alert with severe weather warnings for the majority of England and Wales and much of Northern Ireland.
Revised: Much of the UK was placed on flood alert The UK Government's weather agency, the Met Office , has put much of the UK on flood alert with severe weather warnings for the majority of England and Wales and much of Northern Ireland.
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Original:  The office has said that a total of ten regions have a greater than eighty per cent chance of "severe or extreme weather."
Revised:  The office has said that a total of ten regions have a greater than eighty percent chance of "severe or extreme weather."
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Original:  These regions are SW Scotland, Lothian  Borders, Northern Ireland, Wales, North West England, North East England, Yorkshire  Humber, the West Midlands, the East Midlands, South West England and London South East England.
Revised:  These regions are SW Scotland, Lothian Borders, Northern Ireland, Wales, North West England, North East England, Yorkshire and Humber, the West Midlands, the East Midlands, South West England and London South East England.
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Original:  According to the Los Angeles Times, people who watched coverage of the conventions on PBS were not counted   .
Revised:  According to the Los Angeles Times, people who watched coverage of the conventions on PBS were not counted . .
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Original:  About 38.4 million  watched Obama.
Revised:  About 38.4 million people watched Obama.
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Original:   According to the Los Angeles Times, the demographics of the views differed from Obama on Friday to McCain on Thursday.
Revised:  According to the Los Angeles Times, the demographics of the viewers differed from Obama on Friday to McCain on Thursday.
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Original: 300px|New Zealand in action against India Papaua New Guinea has defeated New Zealand  in the grand final of the Australian Football International Cup.
Revised: 300px|New Zealand in action against India Papua New Guinea (PNG) has defeated New Zealand in the grand final of the Australian Football International Cup.
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Original:  PNG went forward quickly only to be denied by a taller NZ defence .
Revised:  PNG went forward quickly only to be denied by a taller NZ defense .
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Original:  PNG rallied in the last quarter to go ahead and clain their first International Cup title in three attempts.
Revised:  PNG rallied in the last quarter to go ahead and claim their first International Cup title in three attempts.
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Original:  NZ's structure faultered , if only briefly, allowing PNG, who had numbers behind the ball, back in the game.
Revised:  NZ's structure faltered , if only briefly, allowing PNG, who had numbers behind the ball, back in the game.
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Original: 300px|New Zealand in action against India Papua New Guinea (PNG) has defeated New Zealand ( NG ) in the final round of the Australian Football International Cup.
Revised: 300px|New Zealand in action against India Papua New Guinea (PNG) has defeated New Zealand ( NZ ) in the final round of the Australian Football International Cup.
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Original:  Three Quarter time scores: NZ six goals four behinds (40) to PNG four goals ten behind (34).
Revised:  Three Quarter time scores: NZ six goals four behinds (40) to PNG four goals ten behinds (34).
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Original: New Zealand kicked to the punt road end in a high intensity first quarter.
Revised: New Zealand kicked to the Punt Road end in a high intensity first quarter.
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Original:  Trailing at every change, PNG kicked three goals two behinds to New Zealands one goal in the last quarter to win 7.12 (54) to 7.4 (46)
Revised:  Trailing at every change, PNG kicked three goals two behinds to New Zealand's one goal in the last quarter to win 7.12 (54) to 7.4 (46)
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Original: New South Wales Premier  Morris Iemma quit politics on Friday after a disagreement with the governing Australian Labor Party's dominant "Centre Unity" faction about his proposed cabinet reshuffle.
Revised: New South Wales Premier , Morris Iemma quit politics on Friday after a disagreement with the governing Australian Labor Party's dominant "Centre Unity" faction about his proposed cabinet reshuffle.
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Original: 200px|NSW Premier Morris Iemma quit politics on Friday 200px|Nathan Rees was elevated to the NSW Premiership New South Wales Premier, Morris Iemma quit politics on Friday after a disagreement with the governing Australian Labor Party's dominant "Centre Unity" faction about his proposed cabinet reshuffle.
Revised: 200px|NSW Premier Morris Iemma quit politics on Friday New South Wales Premier, Morris Iemma quit politics on Friday after a disagreement with the governing Australian Labor Party's dominant "Centre Unity" faction about his proposed cabinet reshuffle.
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Original:  The Boeing 777-ER crashed early this year as it tried to land at London's Heathrow Airport   
Revised:  The Boeing 777-ER crashed early this year as it tried to land at London's Heathrow Airport . 
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Original:  These were able to form undetected as the aircraft cruised with a low fuel requirement, and it was only when extra fuel was pumped in from the tanks for the landing that the crystals became a problem  
Revised:  These were able to form undetected as the aircraft cruised with a low fuel requirement, and it was only when extra fuel was pumped in from the tanks for the landing that the crystals became a problem . 
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Original: The report says that the current explanation being offered for the accident is aa "apparently hitherto unknown phenomenon" and warns that other combinations of aircraft models and engines may also be vulnerable.
Revised: The report says that the current explanation being offered for the accident is an "apparently hitherto unknown phenomenon" and warns that other combinations of aircraft models and engines may also be vulnerable.
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Original:  Data from 141,000 other flights of such aircraft has not yielded any other set of circumstances similar to the one in the crash flight  
Revised:  Data from 141,000 other flights of such aircraft has not yielded any other set of circumstances similar to the one in the crash flight . 
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Original:  To prevent buildup of water during ground operation at freezing temperatures all fuel pumps should be run at full power for one minute  
Revised:  To prevent buildup of water during ground operation at freezing temperatures all fuel pumps should be run at full power for one minute . 
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Original: The report states that the AAIB believes the crash occured when ice crystals formed within the fuel system.
Revised: The report states that the AAIB believes the crash occurred when ice crystals formed within the fuel system.
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Original:  The aircraft suffered substantial damage as it slid accross the grass to the runway threshold, where it came to rest, and was written off.
Revised:  The aircraft suffered substantial damage as it slid across the grass to the runway threshold, where it came to rest, and was written off.
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Original:  The AAIB has determined that the fule was at a temperature below 0°C for an unusually long duration.
Revised:  The AAIB has determined that the fuel was at a temperature below 0°C for an unusually long duration.
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Original:  The affected aircraft are opearated by US carriers American Airlines and Delta Air Lines
Revised:  The affected aircraft are operated by US carriers American Airlines and Delta Air Lines
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Original:  SaeeduzZaman Siddiqui, who was fielded by Pakistan Muslim League-Nawaz Group , bagged 153 votes while Senator Mushahid Hussain, a candidate from the Pakistan Muslim League-Quaid-e-Azam Group, got 43 votes.
Revised:  Saeeduz Zaman Siddiqui, who was fielded by Pakistan Muslim League-Nawaz Group , bagged 153 votes while Senator Mushahid Hussain, a candidate from the Pakistan Muslim League-Quaid-e-Azam Group, got 43 votes.
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Original: Asif Ali Zardari, widower of former Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto has won in the race of Presidential Electionof Pakistan .
Revised: Asif Ali Zardari, widower of former Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto has won the Pakistani Presidential Election .
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Original:  The election was called after resignation of Pervaiz Musharaff .
Revised:  The election was called after resignation of Pervez Musharraf .
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Original:  He was also serving as a Co-Chairman of Pakistan Peoples Partywith Bilawal Bhutto Zardari.
Revised:  He also serves as a co-chairman of Pakistan Peoples Partywith Bilawal Bhutto Zardari.
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Original:  He was also serving as a Co-Chairman of Pakistan Peoples Partywith Bilawal Bhutto Zardari.
Revised:  He was also serving as a Co-Chairman of Pakistan Peoples Party with Bilawal Bhutto Zardari.
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Original:  Saeeduz Zaman Siddiqui, who was fielded by Pakistan Muslim League-Nawaz Group, bagged 153 votes while Senator Mushahid Hussain, a candidate from the Pakistan Muslim League-Quaid-e-Azam Group, got 43 votes.
Revised:  Saeeduz Zaman Siddiqui, who was fielded by Pakistan Muslim League-Nawaz Group, received 153 votes while Senator Mushahid Hussain, a candidate from the Pakistan Muslim League-Quaid-e-Azam Group, got 43 votes.
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Original:  The Bristol Organic food festival , which is Europe's largest festival for organic food, launched today in Bristol.
Revised:  The Bristol Organic Food Festival , which is Europe's largest festival for organic food, launched today in Bristol.
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Original: ambox|text=II am attending this event later today to do OR and take phtos.
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Original:  Reasearch has found that organic food sales have fallen by 8.1\% over the last year  
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Original:  Reasearch has found that organic food sales have fallen by 8.1\% over the last year.
Revised:  Research has found that organic food sales have fallen by 8.1\% over the last year.
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Original:   "People have got less money, their ordinary food shopping has gone through the roof;
Revised:  The event took place despite the heavy rain which has occurred throughout the day in Bristol. "People have got less money, their ordinary food shopping has gone through the roof;
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Original:  WholeFoods Market are one of the organisations that displayed at the festival   
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Original:  The event took place despite the heavy rain which has occurred throughout the day in Bristol.
Revised:  The event was launched despite the heavy rain which has occurred throughout the day in Bristol.
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Original:  Thiis downturn in the organic food market has meant that some companies, such as WholeFoods Market are planning to close some of their stores.
Revised:  This downturn in the organic food market has meant that some companies, such as WholeFoods Market are planning to close some of their stores.
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Original: The International Criminal Court has announced an investigation into war crimes and crimes against humanity in the Darfur region of w: Sudan.
Revised: The International Criminal Court has announced an investigation into war crimes and crimes against humanity in the Darfur region of Sudan.
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Original: As well as training to be a teacher Rice is also an actress and model.
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Original:  However, (MP) didn't support the bills, naming some issues he didn't expect the bill to address but found  important, such as "the dangerous promotions of deep discounting of alcohol, the failure to enforce responsible service of alcohol in venues and excessive liquor outlet density".
Revised:  However, (MP) didn't support the bills, naming some issues he didn't expect the bill to address but found more important, such as "the dangerous promotions of deep discounting of alcohol, the failure to enforce responsible service of alcohol in venues and excessive liquor outlet density".
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Original: The bill was drafted in response to death of 18-year-old teenager named Daniel Christie on January 11, following 11 days in hospital after allegedly being punched by drunk Shaun McNeil, aged 25, at . He allegedly had also attacked Daniel's brother, Peter , with minor injuries ;
Revised: The bill was drafted in response to death of 18-year-old teenager named Daniel Christie on January 11, following 11 days in hospital after allegedly being punched by drunk Shaun McNeil, aged 25, at . He allegedly had also attacked Daniel's brother, Peter ;
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Original:  Shaun's court case has been adjourned until March and the sentence was not yet known
Revised:  Shaun's court case has been adjourned until March 
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Original:  "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", the greatest event to examine administration and preparation of 2009 Summer Deaflympics, started today September 6 on Taipei, Taiwan.
Revised:  "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", a large sporting event which takes place as part of the build up to the 2009 Summer Deaflympics, started today September 6 on Taipei, Taiwan.
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Original:  The invitation games featured 5 sports including table tennis, soccer, judo, karate, and taekwondo held successively at Taipei Arena,  Taipei Nangang Sports Center,  National Taipei University of Education, Taipei Municipal University of Education, and Yinfeng Riverside Park.
Revised:  The invitation games featured 5 sports including table tennis, soccer, judo, karate, and taekwondo . The events took place at the Taipei Arena, Taipei Nangang Sports Center, National Taipei University of Education, Taipei Municipal University of Education, and Yinfeng Riverside Park.
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Original:  The invitation games featured 5 sports including table tennis, soccer, judo, karate, and taekwondo held successively at Taipei Arena,  Taipei Nangang Sports Center,  National Taipei University of Education, Taipei Municipal University of Education, and Yinfeng Riverside Park.
Revised:  The invitation games featured 5 sports including table tennis, soccer, judo, karate, and taekwondo held successively at Taipei Arena, teh Taipei Nangang Sports Center, National Taipei University of Education, Taipei Municipal University of Education, and Yinfeng Riverside Park.
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Original:  The invitation games featured 5 sports including table tennis, soccer, judo, karate, and taekwondo held successively at Taipei Arena,  Taipei Nangang Sports Center,  National Taipei University of Education, Taipei Municipal University of Education, and Yinfeng Riverside Park.
Revised:  The invitation games featured 5 sports including table tennis, soccer, judo, karate, and taekwondo held successively at Taipei Arena, Taipei Nangang Sports Center, the National Taipei University of Education, Taipei Municipal University of Education, and Yinfeng Riverside Park.
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Original:  Approximate 300 participants from 13 countries (including the host, Chinese Taipei) took part in this friendship event.
Revised:  Approximate 300 participants from 13 countries (including the host, Chinese Taipei) took part in this event.
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Original:  Before the main competition, the Taipei City Government yesterday (September 5) unveiled a new slogan - "Power in me!" and started a one-year countdown for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
Revised:  Before the main competition, the Taipei City Government yesterday nveiled a new slogan - "Power in me!" and started a one-year countdown for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
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Original:  Before the main competition, the Taipei City Government yesterday (September 5) unveiled a new slogan - "Power in me!" and started a one-year countdown for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
Revised:  Before the main competition, the Taipei City Government yesterday (September 5) unveiled a new slogan - "Power in me!" and started the one-year countdown for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
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Original:  The opening day mainly featured group competitions of table tennis.
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Original:  Before the evening , Japan and South Korea easily made a winning streak in Women's Team Round Robin , Chinese Taipei, the host team, successively beat South Korea and Hong Kong in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  During the day , Japan and South Korea easily made a winning streak in Women's Team Round Robin , Chinese Taipei, the host team, successively beat South Korea and Hong Kong in Men's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  Before the evening , Japan and South Korea easily made a winning streak in Women's Team Round Robin , Chinese Taipei, the host team, successively beat South Korea and Hong Kong in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  Before the evening , Japan and South Korea easily won in the Women's Team Round Robin , Chinese Taipei, the host team, successively beat South Korea and Hong Kong in Men's Team Round Robin.
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Original:  Before the evening , Japan and South Korea easily made a winning streak in Women's Team Round Robin , Chinese Taipei, the host team, successively beat South Korea and Hong Kong in Men's Team Round Robin.
Revised:  Before the evening , Japan and South Korea easily made a winning streak in Women's Team Round Robin . Chinese Taipei, the host team, successively beat South Korea and Hong Kong in Men's Team Round Robin.
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