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Original:  Over 500 people were evacuated on  Saipan, Tinian and Rota.
Revised:  Over 500 people were evacuated on the Mariana Islands of Saipan, Tinian and Rota.
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Original:  Nabi is expected to swerve eastward over the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern parts of South Korea .
Revised:  Nabi is expected to swerve eastward over the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern parts of South Korea 
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Original: An elicopter loose a concrete block  when it was carrying it up to an Austrian mountain  .
Revised: A helicopter let loose a concrete block when it was carrying it up to an Austrian mountain .
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Original: An elicopter loose a concrete block  when it was carrying it up to an Austrian mountain  .
Revised: An elicopter loose a concrete block when it was flying it up to an Austrian mountain .
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Original:  Two more cars started to tilting very much and some people went out from these cars.
Revised:  Two more cars started tilting as some people were flung out from these cars.
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Original:  There are also many ingiured , some of them seriously.
Revised:  There are also many injured , some of them seriously.
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Original: On Monday  a helicopter let loose a concrete block weighing nearly 1500 lbs when it was flying it up to an Austrian mountain for a "ski resort construction project".
Revised: On Monday a concrete block weighing nearly 1500 lbs when it was flying it up to an Austrian mountain for a "ski resort construction project".
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Original:  The concrete block struck a cable holding the gondola that suffered all of the casualities  although other gondolas reported people suffering injuries from the jolt.
Revised:  The concrete block struck a cable holding the gondola that suffered all of the casualities , although other gondolas reported people suffering injuries from the jolt.
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Original:  The car that was hit fell quite some distance to the ground, up to 100's of meters.
Revised:  The car that was hit fell quite some distance to the ground, up to hundreds of meters.
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Original:  The blame game will always be there so your ears need to be thick," Atmadi stated, along with "The important thing is to stay committed and put humanitarian concerns at the top.  
Revised:  The blame game will always be there so your ears need to be thick," Atmadi stated, along with "The important thing is to stay committed and put humanitarian concerns at the top. " 
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Original: The nations hard hit by last year's devastating  tsunami are now lending advice to the  United States on how to cope with the Katrina crisis.
Revised: The nations hard hit by last year's devastating w: tsunami are now lending advice to the United States on how to cope with the Katrina crisis.
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Original: The nations hard hit by last year's devastating  tsunami are now lending advice to the  United States on how to cope with the Katrina crisis.
Revised: The nations hard hit by last year's devastating tsunami are now lending advice to the w: United States on how to cope with the Katrina crisis.
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Original:  Nopadol Somboonsub, the head of tsunami corpse identification in  Thailand noted that the U.S. needs to "...examine the bodies slowly and put all the data into a computer," and added that "It's very important to get it right.
Revised:  Nopadol Somboonsub, the head of tsunami corpse identification in w: Thailand noted that the U.S. needs to "...examine the bodies slowly and put all the data into a computer," and added that "It's very important to get it right.
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Original:  In  India too, experts have advice for the U.S. For instance, one unnamed Indian official said that nations should not be arrogant when it comes to handling disasters.
Revised:  In w: India too, experts have advice for the U.S. For instance, one unnamed Indian official said that nations should not be arrogant when it comes to handling disasters.
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Original:  In  Aceh, in  Indonesia, Budi Atmadi, head of relief operations, said that humanitarian concerns must come first.
Revised:  In w: Aceh, in Indonesia, Budi Atmadi, head of relief operations, said that humanitarian concerns must come first.
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Original:  In  Aceh, in  Indonesia, Budi Atmadi, head of relief operations, said that humanitarian concerns must come first.
Revised:  In Aceh, in w: Indonesia, Budi Atmadi, head of relief operations, said that humanitarian concerns must come first.
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Original: The nations hard hit by last year's devastating w: tsunami are now lending advice to the w: United States on how to cope with the Katrina crisis.
Revised: The nations hard hit by last year's devastating tsunami are now lending advice to the w: United States on how to cope with the Katrina crisis.
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Original: The nations hard hit by last year's devastating w: tsunami are now lending advice to the w: United States on how to cope with the Katrina crisis.
Revised: The nations hard hit by last year's devastating w: tsunami are now lending advice to the United States on how to cope with the Katrina crisis.
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Original:  Nopadol Somboonsub, the head of tsunami corpse identification in w: Thailand noted that the U.S. needs to "...examine the bodies slowly and put all the data into a computer," and added that "It's very important to get it right.
Revised:  Nopadol Somboonsub, the head of tsunami corpse identification in Thailand noted that the U.S. needs to "...examine the bodies slowly and put all the data into a computer," and added that "It's very important to get it right.
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Original:  In w: India too, experts have advice for the U.S. For instance, one unnamed Indian official said that nations should not be arrogant when it comes to handling disasters.
Revised:  In India too, experts have advice for the U.S. For instance, one unnamed Indian official said that nations should not be arrogant when it comes to handling disasters.
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Original:  In w: Aceh, in w: Indonesia, Budi Atmadi, head of relief operations, said that humanitarian concerns must come first.
Revised:  In Aceh, in w: Indonesia, Budi Atmadi, head of relief operations, said that humanitarian concerns must come first.
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Original:  In w: Aceh, in w: Indonesia, Budi Atmadi, head of relief operations, said that humanitarian concerns must come first.
Revised:  In w: Aceh, in Indonesia, Budi Atmadi, head of relief operations, said that humanitarian concerns must come first.
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Original:  Of all people, he should understand this, as his team dealt with the identities of 5,395 corpses of various ethnicities in Thailand.
Revised:  Somboonsub speaks from a position of experience, his team having dealt with the identities of 5,395 corpses of various ethnicities in Thailand.
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Original:  They were in pursuit of a white truck which is extrememely common in all of the middle east.
Revised:  They were in pursuit of a what is only called a "white truck" which is extrememely common in all of the middle east.
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Original:  Soon after it became appearent that they were going to kill them a female relative named Dalal Sadaam, who has just given birth attempted to stop the violence only to be assaulted herself by the butt of a rifle into the mouth.
Revised:  Soon after it became appearent that they were going to kill them a female relative named Dalal Sadaam, who has just given birth attempted to stop the violence only to be assaulted herself by the butt of a rifle to the mouth.
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Original: On May 11, 2003 a part of a platoon of the 3rd Battalion Parachute regiment headed by a Corporal Evans who was travelling in one vehicle while his second in command Private May was travelling in a second vehicle  were in pursuit of a what is only called a "white truck" which is extrememely common in all of the middle east  .
Revised: On May 11, 2003 a part of a platoon of the 3rd Battalion Parachute regiment headed by a Corporal Evans who was travelling in one vehicle while his second in command Private May was travelling in a second vehicle and were in pursuit of a what is only called a "white truck" which is extrememely common in all of the middle east .
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Original:  They  stopped a white Toyota truck driven by one Athar Finnjan Saddam who along with the 18 year old victim were taken out of the truck and thrown to the ground.
Revised:  They soon stopped a white Toyota truck driven by one Athar Finnjan Saddam who along with the 18 year old victim were taken out of the truck and thrown to the ground.
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Original:  On May 11, 2003 a part of a platoon of the 3rd Battalion Parachute Regiment were in what is described as a "small southern Iraqi village".
Revised:  On May 11, 2003 a part of a platoon of the 3rd Battalion Parachute Regiment visited a "small southern Iraqi village".
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Original:  They soon stopped a white Toyota truck driven by one Athar Finnjan Saddam who along with the 18 year old victim were taken out of the truck and thrown to the ground.
Revised:  They soon stopped a white Toyota truck driven by Athar Finnjan Saddam who along with the 18 year old victim were taken out of the truck and thrown to the ground.
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Original:  It is at this time that the paratroopers allegedly begain beating both men brutally without provocation.
Revised:  It is at this time that the paratroopers allegedly began beating both men brutally without provocation.
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Original:  Only 2 of the paratroopers months later even recalled the incident which should cause some alarm as to the possibility of many incidents such as this going unreported.
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Original:  Soon after it became appearent that they were going to kill them a female relative named Dalal Sadaam, who has just given birth  attempted to stop the violence only to be assaulted herself by the butt of a rifle to the mouth.
Revised:  Dalal Sadaam, who has just given birth attempted to stop the violence only to be assaulted herself by the butt of a rifle to the mouth.
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Original:  Soon after it became appearent that they were going to kill them a female relative named Dalal Sadaam, who has just given birth  attempted to stop the violence only to be assaulted herself by the butt of a rifle to the mouth.
Revised:  Soon after it became appearent that they were going to kill them a female relative named Dalal Sadaam, a female relative who had just given birth attempted to stop the violence only to be assaulted herself by the butt of a rifle to the mouth.
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Original:  Soon after it became appearent that they were going to kill them a female relative named Dalal Sadaam, who has just given birth  attempted to stop the violence only to be assaulted herself by the butt of a rifle to the mouth.
Revised:  Soon after it became appearent that they were going to kill them a female relative named Dalal Sadaam, who has just given birth , attempted to stop the violence only to be assaulted herself by the butt of a rifle to the mouth.
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Original:  Eyewitnesses were mostly Marsh Arabs which are highly illiterate and have had trouble understanding the interviewer's questions but have been cooperating fully.
Revised:  Eyewitnesses were mostly illiterate Marsh Arabs who have had trouble understanding the interviewer's questions but have been cooperating fully.
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Original:  A price of about  2 million £ is currently being attached to the cost of the trial in the UK but the family of the victim may be able to extract civil damages from the UK in the emerging Iraqi judicial system along with thousands of others who have suffered from the US or UK's armed forces under occupation
Revised:  A price of about £ 2 million £ is currently being attached to the cost of the trial in the UK but the family of the victim may be able to extract civil damages from the UK in the emerging Iraqi judicial system along with thousands of others who have suffered from the US or UK's armed forces under occupation
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Original:  A price of about  2 million £ is currently being attached to the cost of the trial in the UK but the family of the victim may be able to extract civil damages from the UK in the emerging Iraqi judicial system along with thousands of others who have suffered from the US or UK's armed forces under occupation
Revised:  A price of about 2 million is currently being attached to the cost of the trial in the UK but the family of the victim may be able to extract civil damages from the UK in the emerging Iraqi judicial system along with thousands of others who have suffered from the US or UK's armed forces under occupation
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Original:  A price of about  2 million £ is currently being attached to the cost of the trial in the UK but the family of the victim may be able to extract civil damages from the UK in the emerging Iraqi judicial system along with thousands of others who have suffered from the US or UK's armed forces under occupation
Revised:  A price of about 2 million £ is currently being attached to the cost of the trial in the UK ; however, the family of the victim may be able to extract civil damages from the UK in the emerging Iraqi judicial system along with thousands of others who have suffered from the US or UK's armed forces under occupation
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Original:  A price of about  2 million £ is currently being attached to the cost of the trial in the UK but the family of the victim may be able to extract civil damages from the UK in the emerging Iraqi judicial system along with thousands of others who have suffered from the US or UK's armed forces under occupation
Revised:  A price of about 2 million £ is currently being attached to the cost of the trial in the UK but the family of the victim may be able to extract civil damages from the UK in the emerging Iraqi judicial system 
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Original:  After the soldiers left, the other victmis took Abdullah to a doctor.
Revised:  After the soldiers left, the other victims took Abdullah to a doctor.
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Original: |The orbits of planets in the Gliese 581 system compared to those of our own solar system Steven Vogt of the University of California stated, that Gliese 581g potentailly has a graviational pull similar to that of Earth, which would allow humans to walk around upright on its surface although human inhabitation of the plant is in no foreseeable future.
Revised: |The orbits of planets in the Gliese 581 system compared to those of our own solar system Steven Vogt of the University of California stated, that Gliese 581g potentailly has a graviational pull similar to that of Earth, which would allow humans to walk around upright on its surface although human inhabitation of the planet is in no foreseeable future.
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Original:  The planet  aptly named ' Gliese 581 g'  is approximately 20 light years away from Earth and is hypothesised to have a generally rocky landscape with enough gravitational pull to accumulate an atmosphere.
Revised:  The planet , aptly named ' Gliese 581 g' is approximately 20 light years away from Earth and is hypothesised to have a generally rocky landscape with enough gravitational pull to accumulate an atmosphere.
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Original:  The planet  aptly named ' Gliese 581 g'  is approximately 20 light years away from Earth and is hypothesised to have a generally rocky landscape with enough gravitational pull to accumulate an atmosphere.
Revised:  The planet aptly named ' Gliese 581 g' , is approximately 20 light years away from Earth and is hypothesised to have a generally rocky landscape with enough gravitational pull to accumulate an atmosphere.
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Original:  |The orbits of planets in the Gliese 581 system compared to those of our own solar system Steven Vogt of the University of California stated , that Gliese 581g potentailly has a graviational pull similar to that of Earth, which would allow humans to walk around upright on its surface although human inhabitation of the planet is in no foreseeable future.
Revised:  |The orbits of planets in the Gliese 581 system compared to those of our own solar system Steven Vogt of the University of California stated that Gliese 581g potentailly has a graviational pull similar to that of Earth, which would allow humans to walk around upright on its surface although human inhabitation of the planet is in no foreseeable future.
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Original:  Vogt observed that there is a significant possibility that life exists on Gliese 581 g. "Personally, given the ubiquity and propensity of life to flourish wherever it can, I would say, my own personal feeling is that the chances of life on this planet are 100 per cent," Vogt states .
Revised:  Vogt observed that there is a significant possibility that life exists on Gliese 581 g. "Personally, given the ubiquity and propensity of life to flourish wherever it can, I would say, my own personal feeling is that the chances of life on this planet are 100 per cent," Vogt said .
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Original: |The orbits of planets in the Gliese 581 system compared to those of our own solar system Steven Vogt of the University of California stated that Gliese 581g potentailly has a graviational pull similar to that of Earth, which would allow humans to walk around upright on its surface although human inhabitation of the planet is in no foreseeable future.
Revised: |The orbits of planets in the Gliese 581 system compared to those of our own solar system Steven Vogt of the University of California stated that Gliese 581g potentailly has a gravitational pull similar to that of Earth, which would allow humans to walk around upright on its surface although human inhabitation of the planet is in no foreseeable future.
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Original: Gliese 581 g is thought  have a temperature range from extremely hot to freezing cold depending on the side with respect to its star.
Revised: Gliese 581 g is thought to have a temperature range from extremely hot to freezing cold depending on the side with respect to its star.
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Original: Astronomers at the University of California have discovered a new planet which is considered to be in the middle  Habitable Zone of its parents star, a discovery which has raised the possibility of finding life on another planet.
Revised: Astronomers at the University of California have discovered a new planet which is considered to be in the middle of the Habitable Zone of its parents star, a discovery which has raised the possibility of finding life on another planet.
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Original: Astronomers at the University of California have discovered a new planet which is considered to be in the middle  Habitable Zone of its parents star, a discovery which has raised the possibility of finding life on another planet.
Revised: Astronomers at the University of California have discovered a new planet which is considered to be in the middle Habitable Zone of its parent star, a discovery which has raised the possibility of finding life on another planet.
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Original:  The planet, aptly named ' Gliese 581 g', is approximately 20 light years away from Earth and is hypothesised to have a generally rocky landscape with enough gravitational pull to accumulate an atmosphere.
Revised:  The planet, named ' Gliese 581 g', is approximately 20 light years away from Earth and is hypothesised to have a generally rocky landscape with enough gravitational pull to accumulate an atmosphere.
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Original: Over the summer a customized distribution of the Linux (or GNU/Linux) operating system has been installed on 2,460 desktops in the  South Tyrol province of Bolzano.
Revised: Over the summer a customized distribution of the Linux (or GNU/Linux) operating system has been installed on 2,460 desktops in the Italian South Tyrol province of Bolzano.
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Original: Over the summer a customized distribution of the Linux (or GNU/Linux) operating system has been installed on 2,460 desktops in the Italian South Tyrol province of Bolzano.
Revised: Over the summer a customized distribution of the Linux (or GNU/Linux) operating system was installed on 2,460 desktops in the Italian South Tyrol province of Bolzano.
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Original:  This deployment includes all 70 of the province's private and public schools and affects more than 16,000 students.
Revised:  This deployment included all 70 of the province's private and public schools and affects more than 16,000 students.
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Original:  In addition to the desktops in the schools, more than 20,000 "LiveCDs" will be created and given for free to the students and their families.
Revised:  In addition to the desktops in the schools, more than 20,000 "LiveCDs" are scheduled to be created and given for free to the students and their families.
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Original:  In addition to the desktops in the schools, more than 20,000 "LiveCDs" will be created and given for free to the students and their families.
Revised:  In addition to the desktops in the schools, more than 20,000 "LiveCDs" will be created and given free of charge to the students and their families.
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Original:  These LiveCDs allow students to use the same software on their home computers that they will use at school.
Revised:  These LiveCDs allow students to use the same software on their home computers that they are going to use at school.
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Original:  The switch was funded by the province of Bolzano, the European Social Fund, and the Center for Professional Formation in Italian language
Revised:  The switch was funded by the province of Bolzano, the European Social Fund, and the Center for Professional Formation in Italian Language
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Original: In addition to the desktops in the schools, more than 20,000 "LiveCDs " are scheduled to be created and given free of charge to the students and their families.
Revised: In addition to the desktops in the schools, more than 20,000 LiveCDs are scheduled to be created and given free of charge to the students and their families.
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Original:  The deal was announced during one-day EU-China summit in Beijing by Tony Blair, prime minister of the United Kingdom, which is holding the EU presidency, and Chinese Prime Minister Wen Jiabao    
Revised:  The deal was announced during one-day EU-China summit in Beijing by Tony Blair, prime minister of the United Kingdom, which is holding the EU presidency, and Chinese Prime Minister Wen Jiabao . 
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Original: China and the European Union agreed to unblock 80 milion pieces of Chinese textiles impounded at European ports.
Revised: China and the European Union agreed to unblock 80 million pieces of Chinese textiles impounded at European ports.
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Original:  Today's deal ended the so-called European–Chinese 'bra wars' , which have split the EU member states: those with a strong retail sector supported the agreement, while those with large clothing industries wanted to set up  protectionist policy against China.
Revised:  Today's deal ended the so-called European–Chinese "bra wars" , which have split the EU member states: those with a strong retail sector supported the agreement, while those with large clothing industries wanted to set up protectionist policy against China.
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