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Original:  The updates and revision to the existing Guides include a new section of carbon offsets, "green" certifications and seals renewable energy and renewable materials claims.
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Original:  The updates and revision to the existing Guides include a new section of carbon offsets, "green" certifications and seals renewable energy and renewable materials claims.
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Original:  According to FTC Chairman Jon Leibowitz, "The introduction of environmentally-friendly products into the marketplace is a win for consumers who want to purchase greener products and producers who wants to sell them."
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Original:  History Demonstration at Leverkusen (Germany) against  cooperation of BAYER and UNEP Keep America Beautiful was a campaign founded by beverage manufacturers and others in 1953, partly to forestall regulation of disposable containers.
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Original:  The following year the FTC found that the Nuclear Energy Institute  claims of being environmentally clean were not true.
Revised:  The following year the FTC found that the Nuclear Energy Institute 's claims of being environmentally clean were not true.
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Original:  as a result, they were branded as the "February adverse current" and thoroughly criticized as revisionists.
Revised:  as a result, they were branded as the February Countercurrent and thoroughly criticized as revisionists.
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Original:  Despite being part of the "February adverse current ", Li Fuchun was elected to the 9th CPC Central Committee in 1969.
Revised:  Despite being part of the "February Countercurrent ", Li Fuchun was elected to the 9th CPC Central Committee in 1969.
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Original:  O’Geen, Anthony Toby, Susan B. Southard and Randal J. Southard.
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Original: The disadvantage of this method is that if we have a value of zero in any category, than the result will be zero and won't be suitable for using.
Revised: The disadvantage of this method is that if we have a value of zero in any category, then the result will be zero and won't be suitable for using.
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Original:  Pour categories of decreasing generalization are recognized:
Revised:  Four categories of decreasing generalization are recognized:
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Original:  However, Francisco's nobility titles and honors were stripped instead .
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Original:  El Tiempo (Colombia) article Enciclopédia Salvat.
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Original: Name Vinland was the name given to part of North America by the Icelandic Norseman Leif Eríkson, about 1000 CE.
Revised: vinland Vinland was the name given to part of North America by the Icelandic Norseman Leif Eríkson, about 1000 CE.
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Original: Vinland , VinelandLaurence Marcellus Larson in Canute the Great: 995 (circ.)-1035 and the Rise of Danish Imperialism During the Viking Age, New York: Putnam, 1912 p. 17Elizabeth Janeway in The Vikings, New York, Random House, 1951 throughout or Winland  () was an area of coastal North America explored by Vikings.
Revised: Vinland 'Laurence Marcellus Larson in Canute the Great: 995 (circ.)-1035 and the Rise of Danish Imperialism During the Viking Age, New York: Putnam, 1912 p. 17Elizabeth Janeway in The Vikings, New York, Random House, 1951 throughout or Winland () was an area of coastal North America explored by Vikings.
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Original: Vinland , VinelandLaurence Marcellus Larson in Canute the Great: 995 (circ.)-1035 and the Rise of Danish Imperialism During the Viking Age, New York: Putnam, 1912 p. 17Elizabeth Janeway in The Vikings, New York, Random House, 1951 throughout or Winland  () was an area of coastal North America explored by Vikings.
Revised: Vinland , VinelandLaurence Marcellus Larson in Canute the Great: 995 (circ.)-1035 and the Rise of Danish Imperialism During the Viking Age, New York: Putnam, 1912 p. 17Elizabeth Janeway in The Vikings, New York, Random House, 1951 throughout or Winland ' () was an area of coastal North America explored by Vikings.
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Original: Where is Vinland: L'Anse aux Meadows at canadianmysteries.ca  Based on such interpretations and archaeological evidence, it is now generally accepted that L'Anse aux Meadows was the main base of the Norse explorers .
Revised: Where is Vinland: L'Anse aux Meadows at canadianmysteries.ca Although it is now generally accepted that L'Anse aux Meadows was the main base of the Norse explorers .
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Original:  The southernmost limit of the Norse exploration remains a subject of intense speculation.
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Original: Medieval geographers  The oldest commonly acknowledged surviving written record of Vinland appears in Descriptio insularum Aquilonis , by Adam of Bremen , a German (Saxon) geographer and historian, written in about 1075.
Revised: Medieval geographers Adam of Bremen The oldest commonly acknowledged surviving written record of Vinland appears in Descriptio insularum Aquilonis , by Adam of Bremen , a German (Saxon) geographer and historian, written in about 1075.
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Original: Medieval geographers  The oldest commonly acknowledged surviving written record of Vinland appears in Descriptio insularum Aquilonis , by Adam of Bremen , a German (Saxon) geographer and historian, written in about 1075.
Revised: Medieval geographers The oldest commonly acknowledged surviving written record of Vinland appears in Descriptio insularum Aquilonis by Adam of Bremen , a German (Saxon) geographer and historian, written in about 1075.
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Original: Medieval geographers  The oldest commonly acknowledged surviving written record of Vinland appears in Descriptio insularum Aquilonis , by Adam of Bremen , a German (Saxon) geographer and historian, written in about 1075.
Revised: Medieval geographers The oldest commonly acknowledged surviving written record of Vinland appears in Descriptio insularum Aquilonis , by Adam of Bremen written in about 1075.
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Original:  To write it he visited the Danish king Svend Estridsen, who had knowledge of the northern lands and told him of the "islands" discovered by Norse sailors far out in the Atlantic , of which Vinland was the most remote.
Revised:  Adam was told about "islands" discovered by Norse sailors far out in the Atlantic , of which Vinland was the most remote.
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Original:  To write it he visited the Danish king Svend Estridsen, who had knowledge of the northern lands and told him of the "islands" discovered by Norse sailors far out in the Atlantic , of which Vinland was the most remote.
Revised:  To write it he visited the Danish king Svend Estridsen, who had knowledge of the northern lands and told him of the "islands" discovered by Norse sailors in the Atlantic , of which Vinland was the most remote.
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Original:  Sailing past landscapes of flat stones (Helluland) and forests (Markland) they rounded a cape where they saw the keel of a boat (Kjalarnes), then continued past some extraordinarily long beaches ( Furthustrandir ) before they landed and sent out two runners to explore inland.
Revised:  Sailing past landscapes of flat stones (Helluland) and forests (Markland) they rounded a cape where they saw the keel of a boat (Kjalarnes), then continued past some extraordinarily long beaches ( Furðustrandir ) before they landed and sent out two runners to explore inland.
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Original:  Quaid and his wife plan to make Vermont their permanent home, as his wife grew up there.
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Original:  also producer 2017–Present Tosh.0 Announcer TV series 2018 All You Can Eat Gordon Nominated—Northeast Film Festival Award for Best Supporting Actor in a Feature Film
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Original:  In 1978 Quaid had a supporting role in the Alan Parker drama , Midnight Express , about Americans and an Englishman imprisoned in Turkey.
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Original:  In 1978 Quaid had a supporting role in the Alan Parker drama Midnight Express  about Americans and an Englishman imprisoned in Turkey.
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Original:  Quaid said that he  wanted to play Johnson since he became an actor.
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Original:  Quaid said that he  wanted to play Johnson since he became an actor.
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Original: Waman Gopal Joshi ( ) ( 18 March 1881 – 3 June 1956) was a Marathi journalist, playwright, and freedom fighter, from Maharashtra, India.
Revised: Waman Gopal Joshi ( 18 March 1881 – 3 June 1956) was a Marathi journalist, playwright, and freedom fighter, from Maharashtra, India.
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Original:  They can be ditstributed randomly or in bundles, which sometimes are arranged star-like, and they can be sparse or dense enough to make the quartz body nearly opaque.
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Original:  While otherwise inclusions often reduce the value of a crystal, rutilated quartz in fact is valued for the quality and beauty of these inclusions.
Revised:  While otherwise inclusions often reduce the value of a crystal, rutilated quartz is valued for the quality and beauty of these inclusions.
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Original:   Background Since the Siege of Diu in 1538, the Ottoman Empire was attempting to counter Portuguese influence in the Indian Ocean.
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Original:  The campaign was a catastrophic failure for the Ottomans who lost all but 2 of their ships.
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Original:  URL Background Since the Siege of Diu in 1538, the Ottoman Empire was attempting to counter Portuguese influence in the Indian Ocean.
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Original:  In 1552, Ottoman admiral Piri Reis left Suez 28 galleys and supply ships in the a number of expeditions around the Arabian peninsula against the Portuguese with limited success.
Revised:  In 1552, Ottoman admiral Piri Reis led a number of expeditions around the Arabian peninsula against the Portuguese with limited success.
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Original:  URL However the Portuguese regained the town two years later, Piri Reis was replaced with Murat Reis, who also led an unsuccessful campaign against the Portuguese the following year.
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Original: Initiatives to promote engineering to women Alpha Omega Epsilon Anita Borg Institute for Women and Technology Grace Hopper Celebration of Women in URL Robogals The Society of Women Engineers Women in SET Women in Technology International Women's Engineering Society WIE –
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Original:  Hadramautic: 𐩢𐩳𐩧𐩣𐩩, Ḥḍrmt) is a region in South Arabia, located mostly in present-day eastern Yemen.
Revised:  Hadramautic: 𐩢𐩳𐩧𐩣𐩩, Ḥḍrmt) is a region in South Arabia, mostly in present-day eastern Yemen.
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Original:  Another theory is that after the destruction of Thamūd, the Islamic prophet Ṣāliḥ relocated himself and about 4,000 of his followers to the region and it was there that he died, thus lending the region its morbid name "death has come."
Revised:  Another theory is that after the destruction of Thamūd, the Islamic prophet Ṣāliḥ moved with about 4,000 of his followers to the region and it was there that he died, thus lending the region its morbid name "death has come."
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Original:  Another theory is that after the destruction of Thamūd, the Islamic prophet Ṣāliḥ relocated himself and about 4,000 of his followers to the region and it was there that he died, thus lending the region its morbid name "death has come."
Revised:  Another theory is that after the destruction of Thamūd, the Islamic prophet Ṣāliḥ relocated himself and about 4,000 of his followers to the region and there he died, thus lending the region its morbid name "death has come."
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Original:  Hadramautic: 𐩢𐩳𐩧𐩣𐩩, Ḥḍrmt) is a region in South Arabia, mostly in present-day eastern Yemen, And part in Western Oman and Southern Saudi Arabia.
Revised:  Hadramautic: 𐩢𐩳𐩧𐩣𐩩, Ḥḍrmt) is a region in South Arabia, mostly in present-day eastern Yemen, and part in Western Oman and Southern Saudi Arabia.
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Original:  However, during the Prague Spring of 1968, she was very attracted to Alexander Dubcek 's reform program and helped supply inside information to the Western media.
Revised:  However, during the Prague Spring of 1968, she was very attracted to Alexander Dubček 's reform program and helped supply inside information to the Western media.
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Original:  She was Czechoslovakia's last ambassador to the United States before that country's breakup in 1992.
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Original:  She continued to support reform after the Warsaw Pact invasion of Czechoslovakia, and was fired from her university post in 1968 and expelled from the party in 1970.
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Original: 1993 deaths women diplomats Category:Czech academics Category:Czech economists Category:Czech translators Category:People of the Velvet Revolution Category:Czechoslovak democracy activists  Category:Ambassadors of Czechoslovakia to the United States Category:Charles University in Prague alumni Category:Charles University in Prague faculty Category:Communist Party of Czechoslovakia politicians Category:Deaths from leukemia Category:20th-century economists Category:Women ambassado
Revised: 1993 deaths Category:Czech academics Category:Czech economists Category:Czech translators Category:People of the Velvet Revolution Category:Czechoslovak democracy activists Category:Ambassadors of Czechoslovakia to the United States Category:Charles University in Prague alumni Category:Charles University in Prague faculty Category:Communist Party of Czechoslovakia politicians Category:Deaths from leukemia Category:20th-century economists Category:Women ambassado
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Original: 1993 deaths women diplomats Category:Czech academics Category:Czech economists Category:Czech translators Category:People of the Velvet Revolution Category:Czechoslovak democracy activists  Category:Ambassadors of Czechoslovakia to the United States Category:Charles University in Prague alumni Category:Charles University in Prague faculty Category:Communist Party of Czechoslovakia politicians Category:Deaths from leukemia Category:20th-century economists Category:Women ambassado
Revised: 1993 deaths women diplomats Category:Czech academics Category:Czech economists Category:Czech translators Category:People of the Velvet Revolution Category:Czechoslovak democracy activists Category:Czechoslovak women diplomats Category:Ambassadors of Czechoslovakia to the United States Category:Charles University in Prague alumni Category:Charles University in Prague faculty Category:Communist Party of Czechoslovakia politicians Category:Deaths from leukemia Category:20th-century economists Category:Women ambassado
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Original: Czech academics Category:Czech economists Category:Czech  translators Category:People of the Velvet Revolution Category:Czechoslovak democracy activists Category:Czechoslovak women diplomats Category:Ambassadors of Czechoslovakia to the United States Category:Charles University in Prague alumni Category:Charles University in Prague faculty Category:Communist Party of Czechoslovakia politicians Category:Deaths from leukemia Category:20th-century economists Category:Women ambassado
Revised: Czech academics Category:Czech economists Category:Czech women economists Category:Czech translators Category:People of the Velvet Revolution Category:Czechoslovak democracy activists Category:Czechoslovak women diplomats Category:Ambassadors of Czechoslovakia to the United States Category:Charles University in Prague alumni Category:Charles University in Prague faculty Category:Communist Party of Czechoslovakia politicians Category:Deaths from leukemia Category:20th-century economists Category:Women ambassado
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Original: Deaths by beating in the United States Category:Deaths in police custody in the United States Category:Homeless people Category:People from Fullerton, California Category:History of Orange County, California Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Victims of police brutality Category:2011 in California Category:Deaths by person in the United States Category:Filmed killings by law enforcement Category:Fullerton, California Category:Law enforcement in Californ
Revised: Deaths by beating in the United States Category:Deaths in police custody in the United States Category:Homeless people Category:People from Fullerton, California Category:History of Orange County, California Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Victims of police brutality Category:2011 in California Category:Deaths by person in the United States Category:Filmed killings by law enforcement Category:Fullerton, California Category:Law enforcement in California Category:Law enforcement controversies in the United Stat
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Original:  He died after succumbing to injuries he suffered while being attacked by six members of the Fullerton Police Department, on July 5, 2011, in what was later described as "one of the worst police beatings in [US] history."
Revised:  He was murdered by six members of the Fullerton Police Department, on July 5, 2011, in what was later described as "one of the worst police beatings in [US] history."
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Original:  He died 5 days after struggling with six members of the Fullerton Police Department that he encountered on July 5, 2011, in what was later described as "one of the worst police beatings in [US] history."
Revised:  He died five days after struggling with six members of the Fullerton Police Department that he encountered on July 5, 2011, in what was later described as "one of the worst police beatings in [US] history."
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Original: Slidebar Kitchen involvement In June 2012  Michael Reeves, a former employee of the Slidebar Rock-N-Roll Kitchen, filed a lawsuit for wrongful termination against Jeremy Popoff related to the beating.
Revised: Slidebar Kitchen involvement In June 2012 , Michael Reeves, a former employee of the Slidebar Rock-N-Roll Kitchen, filed a lawsuit for wrongful termination against Jeremy Popoff related to the beating.
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Original:  He then became comatose, and  died when taken off life support five days later.
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Original:  In contrast, Dr. Gary Vilke ( a professor of clinical emergency medicine at UC San Diego ) testified for the defense during the trial.
Revised:  In contrast, Dr. Gary Vilke , a professor of clinical emergency medicine at UC San Diego ) testified for the defense during the trial.
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Original:  In contrast, Dr. Gary Vilke ( a professor of clinical emergency medicine at UC San Diego ) testified for the defense during the trial.
Revised:  In contrast, Dr. Gary Vilke ( a professor of clinical emergency medicine at UC San Diego , testified for the defense during the trial.
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Original:  He has investigated in-custody deaths for 20 years and has published studies on "mechanical compression."
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Original:  Mr. Mardirossian then held several press conferences to address bringing criminal charges against Officer Manuel Ramos, Corporal Jay Cicinelli, and Officer Joseph Wolfe, and the civil lawsuit filed against the City.
Revised:  Atty. Mardirossian held several press conferences to address bringing criminal charges against Officer Manuel Ramos, Corporal Jay Cicinelli, and Officer Joseph Wolfe, and the civil lawsuit filed against the City.
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Original:  These press conferences aired locally, nationally, and internationally  heightening public interest, and imposing pressure on the Orange County District Attorney to file criminal charges.
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Original:  Anonymous response In August 2011, the Internet activist group Anonymous demanded that the officers involved be prosecuted, the Fullerton Police Chief resign, and that Thomas's family be awarded US $5 million in compensation;
Revised:  Response by Anonymous In August 2011, the Internet activist group Anonymous demanded that the officers involved be prosecuted, the Fullerton Police Chief resign, and that Thomas's family be awarded US $5 million in compensation;
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Original:  Anonymous response In August 2011, the Internet activist group Anonymous demanded that the officers involved be prosecuted, the Fullerton Police Chief resign, and that Thomas's family be awarded US $5 million in compensation;
Revised:  Anonymous response In August 2011, the Internet activist group Anonymous demanded that the officers involved be prosecuted, the Fullerton Police Chief resign, and that Thomas's family be awarded $5 million in compensation;
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