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Original:  According to the United States Geological Survey  , a magnitude 6.6 earthquake hit Indonesia at exactly midnight UTC.
Revised:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) , a magnitude 6.6 earthquake hit Indonesia at exactly midnight UTC.
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Original:  The USGS reports the Indonesia earthquake as being centred 2460km ENE of Jakarta, in the Moluccas Islands.
Revised:  The USGS reports the Indonesia earthquake as being centered 2460km ENE of Jakarta, in the Moluccas Islands.
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Original:  The USGS reports the Indonesia earthquake as being centred 2460km ENE of Jakarta, in the Moluccas Islands.
Revised:  The USGS reports the Indonesia earthquake as being centred 2460km East, Northeast of Jakarta, in the Moluccas Islands.
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Original:  Both affected countries issued Tsunami warnings after the earthquakes.
Revised:  Both affected countries issued tsunami warnings after the earthquakes.
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Original:  Both affected countries issued tsunami warnings after the earthquakes.
Revised:  The affected countries issued tsunami warnings after the earthquakes.
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Original:  Paulson has also met with several heads of Wall Street firms to discuss the crisis and try and find possible investors  .
Revised:  Paulson has also met with several executives of Wall Street firms to discuss the crisis and try and find possible investors .
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Original:  The company has lost 80 percent of its stock value since Monday, when it announced that it had not secured a deal with the Korean Development Bank, which was wildly expected to occur.
Revised:  The company has lost 80 percent of its stock value since Monday, when it announced that it had not secured a deal with the Korean Development Bank, which was widely expected to occur.
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Original:  It is unclear if the CIC will act as lead investor or act though JC Flowers,  which the CIC has established a fund with . Paulson has also met with several executives of Wall Street firms to discuss the crisis and try and find possible investors.
Revised:  It is unclear if the CIC will act as lead investor or act though JC Flowers, with which the CIC has established a fund with . Paulson has also met with several executives of Wall Street firms to discuss the crisis and try and find possible investors.
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Original:  It is unclear if the CIC will act as lead investor or act though JC Flowers,  which the CIC has established a fund with . Paulson has also met with several executives of Wall Street firms to discuss the crisis and try and find possible investors.
Revised:  It is unclear if the CIC will act as lead investor or act though JC Flowers, which the CIC has established a fund . Paulson has also met with several executives of Wall Street firms to discuss the crisis and try and find possible investors.
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Original:  In a meeting initiated by Timothy Geithner, president of the Federal Reserve Bank of New York, it was pressed upon the the banking industy needed to handle the crisis.
Revised:  In a meeting initiated by Timothy Geithner, president of the Federal Reserve Bank of New York, it was pressed upon the banking industry that it needed to handle the crisis.
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Original:  In a completely unrelated incident less than an hour after the crash in Chatsworth, another Metrolink train collided with a car in Corona, California, killing the female driver of the automobile
Revised:  In an apparently unrelated incident less than an hour after the crash in Chatsworth, another Metrolink train collided with a car in Corona, California, killing the female driver of the automobile
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Original:  The area in which the crash took place  is hilly and contains a single track;
Revised:  The area in which the crash took place hi is hilly and contains a single track;
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Original:  Around 250  firefighters were coght doing 25  dead peaple and they didnt get no charges and they also did you mom in bed 5 days ago so be careful and dont shit your pants when you here about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!have responded to the accident scene.
Revised:  Around 250 ,000,000,000 firefighters were coght doing 25 dead peaple and they didnt get no charges and they also did you mom in bed 5 days ago so be careful and dont shit your pants when you here about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!have responded to the accident scene.
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Original:  Around 250  firefighters were coght doing 25  dead peaple and they didnt get no charges and they also did you mom in bed 5 days ago so be careful and dont shit your pants when you here about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!have responded to the accident scene.
Revised:  Around 250 firefighters were coght doing 25 ,000,000,000 dead peaple and they didnt get no charges and they also did you mom in bed 5 days ago so be careful and dont shit your pants when you here about it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!have responded to the accident scene.
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Original: The weeks festivities and hard fought races came to it's climax on Sunday with the final races for the Biplane, Formula One, Jet, Sport, T-6  and Unlimited classes.
Revised: The week's festivities and hard fought races came to it's climax on Sunday with the final races for the Biplane, Formula One, Jet, Sport, T-6 and Unlimited classes.
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Original: The weeks festivities and hard fought races came to it's climax on Sunday with the final races for the Biplane, Formula One, Jet, Sport, T-6  and Unlimited classes.
Revised: The weeks festivities and hard fought races came to its climax on Sunday with the final races for the Biplane, Formula One, Jet, Sport, T-6 and Unlimited classes.
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Original: The weeks festivities and hard fought races came to it's climax on Sunday with the final races for the Biplane, Formula One, Jet, Sport, T-6  and Unlimited classes.
Revised: The weeks festivities and hard fought races came to it's climax on Sunday with the final races for the Biplane, Formula One, Jet, Sport, T-6 , and Unlimited classes.
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Original:  the Biplane Gold at 251 mph, the Jet Gold at 510 mph, the T-6 gold at 244 mph  and the Sport Class SuperSport Gold at 392 mph.
Revised:  the Biplane Gold at 251 mph, the Jet Gold at 510 mph, the T-6 gold at 244 mph , and the Sport Class SuperSport Gold at 392 mph.
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Original:   Second and Third place went to Dan Martin in Dago Red and Michael Brown in September Fury, respectively.
Revised:  The Second and Third place went to Dan Martin in Dago Red and Michael Brown in September Fury, respectively.
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Original:   Second and Third place went to Dan Martin in Dago Red and Michael Brown in September Fury, respectively.
Revised:  Second and Third places went to Dan Martin in Dago Red and Michael Brown in September Fury, respectively.
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Original: __NOTOC__ __NOEDITSECTION__ The last pass is flown, the final lap completed, the winner has long since left the circle with "Gold Unlimited" race trophy.
Revised:  The last pass is flown, the final lap completed, the winner has long since left the circle with "Gold Unlimited" race trophy.
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Original:  [[Image:Bob Barr-2008.jpg|90px|Former Congressman Bob Barr ]]It should be noted that both of the polls were taken before Barr's controversial snubbing of Republican Congressman Ron Paul |Congressman Ron Paul 's third party unity conference on Wednesday.
Revised:  [[Image:Bob Barr-2008.jpg|90px|Former Congressman Bob Barr ]]It should be noted that both of the polls were taken before Barr's controversial snubbing of Republican Congressman Ron Paul 's third party unity conference on Wednesday.
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Original:  Many of Barr's supporters have since revoked their endorsements of him and joined other presidential campaigns, mainly Baldwin's and Nader's  
Revised:  Many of Barr's supporters have since revoked their endorsements of him and joined other presidential campaigns, mainly Baldwin's and Nader's . 
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Original:  2\% support independent Ralph Nader and 1\% of respondants said they would cast thier ballots for Libertarian Party nominee Bob Barr.
Revised:  2\% support independent Ralph Nader and 1\% of respondents said they would cast thier ballots for Libertarian Party nominee Bob Barr.
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Original:  Baldwin is trailed by Barr, who recieved 1,712 votes (28.7\%).
Revised:  Baldwin is trailed by Barr, who received 1,712 votes (28.7\%).
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Original:  The JBS poll was an online poll of visitors to their web site from June to early September and should not be confused with a scientific poll.
Revised:  The JBS poll was an online poll of visitors to their web site and should not be confused with a scientific poll.
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Original:  2\% support independent Ralph Nader and 1\% of respondents said they would cast thier ballots for Libertarian Party nominee Bob Barr.
Revised:  2\% support independent Ralph Nader and 1\% of respondents said they would cast their ballots for Libertarian Party nominee Bob Barr.
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Original:   Their collapse has also left people stranded in UK airports and delayed other flights as airlines who had chartered XL aircraft for their services sought alternative planes    
Revised:  Their collapse has also left people stranded in UK airports and delayed other flights as airlines who had chartered XL aircraft for their services sought alternative planes . 
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Original: XL Leisure Group - the United Kingdom's third largest tour operator - has collapsed and entered administration.
Revised: XL Leisure Group — the United Kingdom's third largest tour operator - has collapsed and entered administration.
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Original: XL Leisure Group - the United Kingdom's third largest tour operator - has collapsed and entered administration.
Revised: XL Leisure Group - the United Kingdom's third largest tour operator — has collapsed and entered administration.
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Original:  Some 85 ,000 passengers have been left stranded overseas as a result.
Revised:  About85 ,000 passengers have been left stranded overseas as a result.
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Original:  The Civil Aviation Authority is working to bring these people home, and Air Travel Organisers' Licensing scheme stated that 'repatriation aircraft' had been scrambled.
Revised:  The Civil Aviation Authority is working to bring these people home, and Air Travel Organisers' Licensing scheme stated that "repatriation aircraft" had been scrambled.
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Original:  Both flights chartered specially for the prupose and scheduled services with spare seats are being used.
Revised:  Both flights chartered specially for the purpose and scheduled services with spare seats are being used.
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Original:  XL operated a number of subisduaries , including XL Airways, Travel City Direct and the Really Great Holiday company.
Revised:  XL operated a number of subsidiaries , including XL Airways, Travel City Direct and the Really Great Holiday company.
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Original:  Refunds will be availible for most, but some who booked via XL's website or call center and did not use a credit card or Visa debit card are not able to claim their money back.
Revised:  Refunds will be available for most, but some who booked via XL's website or call center and did not use a credit card or Visa debit card are not able to claim their money back.
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Original:  XL's CEO Phil Wyatt blamed a combination of himself, high oil prices and econimic instability for the problem.
Revised:  XL's CEO Phil Wyatt blamed a combination of himself, high oil prices and economic instability for the problem.
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Original:  He said he was 'devastated' and apologised to those affected, but said they were forced to give up after lenders pulled out
Revised:  He said he was "devastated" and apologised to those affected, but said they were forced to give up after lenders pulled out
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Original: After  table tennis event  , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
Revised: After the table tennis event , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
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Original: After  table tennis event  , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
Revised: After table tennis event concluded , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
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Original: After  table tennis event  , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
Revised: After table tennis event , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
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Original: After  table tennis event  , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
Revised: After table tennis event , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
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Original: After  table tennis event  , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
Revised: After table tennis event , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008. " (September 8).
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Original: After  table tennis event  , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " (September 8).
Revised: After table tennis event , medalists from the martial art events (taekwondo, karate , and judo) were all confirmed on the 3rd matchday of "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008 " 
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Original:  Except for steady performances from the host (Chinese Taipei ) team at karate and taekwondo events, European athletes battled East Asian (Japan and South Korea) athletes to perform their strengths.
Revised:  Except for steady performances from the host Chinese Taipei team during the karate and taekwondo events, European athletes battled East Asian (Japan and South Korea) athletes to perform their strengths.
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Original:  It became the shortest match in the judo event.
Revised:  It was the shortest match in the judo event.
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Original:  In the final day (September 10 ) , the top three teams from soccer event were also stood out although it was a bad weather in Taipei.
Revised:  On the final day (September 10 ) , the top three teams from soccer event were also stood out although it was a bad weather in Taipei.
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Original:  In the final day (September 10 ) , the top three teams from soccer event were also stood out although it was a bad weather in Taipei.
Revised:  In the final day , Sept. 10 ) , the top three teams from soccer event were also stood out although it was a bad weather in Taipei.
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Original:  In the final day (September 10 ) , the top three teams from soccer event were also stood out although it was a bad weather in Taipei.
Revised:  In the final day (September 10 , the top three teams from soccer event were also stood out although it was a bad weather in Taipei.
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Original:  A decisive match for the gold medal - Japan vs Thailand, was taken place at the final day .
Revised:  The gold medal match took place between Japan and Thailand .
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Original:  But during the extra add time (additional time) of the 1st half, Thailand's Somsak Thongdee tied the game for 1-1.
Revised:  But during the added time of the first half, Thailand's Somsak Thongdee tied the game for 1-1.
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Original:  But during the extra add time (additional time) of the 1st half, Thailand's Somsak Thongdee tied the game for 1-1.
Revised:  But during the extra add time (additional time) of the 1st half, Thailand's Somsak Thongdee tied the game 1-1.
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Original:  After the start of the 2nd half, Thailand straightened up their offenses, and then in the 60th minute, Thailand 's captain Anothai Sathiyamat scored a decisive goal, turning the advantage for Thailand to 2-1.
Revised:  After the start of the second half, Thailand straightened up their offenses, and then in the 60th minute, Thailand 's captain Anothai Sathiyamat scored a decisive goal, turning the advantage for Thailand to 2-1.
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Original:  After the start of the 2nd half, Thailand straightened up their offenses, and then in the 60th minute, Thailand 's captain Anothai Sathiyamat scored a decisive goal, turning the advantage for Thailand to 2-1.
Revised:  After the start of the 2nd half, Thailand straightened their offense, and in the 60th minute, Thailand 's captain Anothai Sathiyamat scored a decisive goal, turning the advantage for Thailand to 2-1.
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Original:  After the start of the 2nd half, Thailand straightened up their offenses, and then in the 60th minute, Thailand 's captain Anothai Sathiyamat scored a decisive goal, turning the advantage for Thailand to 2-1.
Revised:  After the start of the 2nd half, Thailand straightened up their offenses, and then in the 60th minute, Thailand captain Anothai Sathiyamat scored a decisive goal, turning the advantage for Thailand to 2-1.
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Original:  Finally, Thailand narrowly won Japan with a final score of 2-1, winning the gold medal of soccer event in the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008" . Chih-he Chen (left) acknowledged a honor medal to  Lung-pin Hau during the Closing Ceremony.
Revised:  Finally, Thailand narrowly won Japan with a final score of 2-1, winning the gold medal of soccer event in the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008" . Chih-he Chen (left) presents a honor medal to Lung-pin Hau during the Closing Ceremony.
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Original:  Iran easily won Australia with a high-score shutout of 8-0  . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in this match . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, acknowledged a honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government  show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
Revised:  Iran defeated Australia with a high-score shutout of 8-0 . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in this match . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, acknowledged a honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
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Original:  Iran easily won Australia with a high-score shutout of 8-0  . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in this match . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, acknowledged a honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government  show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
Revised:  Iran easily won Australia with a 8-0 . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in this match . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, acknowledged a honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
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Original:  Iran easily won Australia with a high-score shutout of 8-0  . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in this match . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, acknowledged a honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government  show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
Revised:  Iran easily won Australia with a high-score shutout of 8-0 shutout . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in this match . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, acknowledged a honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
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Original:  Iran easily won Australia with a high-score shutout of 8-0  . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in this match . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, acknowledged a honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government  show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
Revised:  Iran easily won Australia with a high-score shutout of 8-0 . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in for Iran . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, acknowledged a honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
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Original:  Iran easily won Australia with a high-score shutout of 8-0  . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in this match . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, acknowledged a honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government  show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
Revised:  Iran easily won Australia with a high-score shutout of 8-0 . Mostafa Heydaribondarabadi, Hosseinali Mohammadi Firouzjaei, Mazaher Shirzad Sibani, Hamid Reza Khazaei, all scored in this match . After the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008", Chih-he Chen, President of Asia Pacific Deaf Sports Confederation, presented an honor medal for this event during the closing ceremony and hoped the Taipei City Government show the best service for the 2009 Summer Deaflympics.
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