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Original:  The chopper was returning from  Nawapachi of Kishtawar district after supplying ammunitions , food and arms for the troops there.
Revised:  The chopper was returning from Nawapachi of Kishtawar district after supplying ammunition , food and arms for the troops there.
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Original:  The chopper went deep into the water body and thus, the exact number of people on board is not known though police officers said that at least one of them has died.
Revised:  The chopper went deep into the water , and the exact number of people on board is not known though police officers said that at least one of them has died.
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Original:  The chopper went deep into the water body and thus, the exact number of people on board is not known though police officers said that at least one of them has died.
Revised:  The chopper went deep into the water body and thus, the exact number of people on board is not known , although police officers said that at least one of them has died.
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Original:  The chopper went deep into the water body and thus, the exact number of people on board is not known though police officers said that at least one of them has died.
Revised:  The chopper went deep into the water body and thus, the exact number of people on board is not known though police officers said that at least one of them died.
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Original:  There were two choppers, as said by a police officer, and the second one was still hovering over the area when the first one got crashed.
Revised:  There were two choppers, as said by a police officer, and the second one was still hovering over the area when the first one crashed.
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Original:  Rescue teams are being sent while the army is already on the way 
Revised:  Rescue teams are being sent , and the army is already on the way 
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Original:  Rescue teams are being sent while the army is already on the way 
Revised:  Rescue teams are being sent while the army is also on the way 
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Original:  Rescue teams are being sent, and the army is also on the way to assist with rescue efforts
Revised:  Rescue teams were soon dispatched, and Pakistani troops are also on the way to assist with rescue efforts
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Original: An Indian Air Force (IAF) MI-17 chopper crashed into the Chenab river in the Doda district on Friday, after it got caught into a cable fire of a bridge.
Revised: An Indian Air Force (IAF) MI-17 helicopter crashed into the Chenab river in the Doda district on Friday, after it got caught into a cable fire of a bridge.
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Original:  There were two choppers , as said by a police officer, and the second one was still hovering over the area when the first one crashed.
Revised:  There were two helicopters , as said by a police officer, and the second one was still hovering over the area when the first one crashed.
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Original: (Washington) An Afghan policeman stands guard as firefighters are seen in the back ground as the site of an attack in Kabul, Afghanistan , 28 Oct 2009Afghan authorities say they have arrested at least six people believed to have been involved in Wednesday's deadly attack on a United Nations guesthouse in Kabul.
Revised:  An Afghan policeman stands guard as firefighters are seen in the back ground as the site of an attack in Kabul, Afghanistan , 28 Oct 2009Afghan authorities say they have arrested at least six people believed to have been involved in Wednesday's deadly attack on a United Nations guesthouse in Kabul.
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Original:  The Taliban assault killed five foreign U.N. employees and at least two Afghan guards.
Revised:  The Taliban assault killed five foreign UN employees and at least two Afghan guards.
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Original:  Militants stormed the U.N. residence around dawn wearing suicide vests.
Revised:  Militants stormed the UN residence around dawn wearing suicide vests.
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Original:  U.N. security officers battled them for at least an hour before NATO troops and Afghan police showed up.
Revised:  UN security officers battled them for at least an hour before NATO troops and Afghan police showed up.
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Original:  United Nations officials have questioned why it took so long for reinforcements to arrive and they called for a strengthening of security measures . Some information for this report was provided by AP.
Revised:  UN officials have called for a strengthening of security measures . Some information for this report was provided by AP.
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Original:  United Nations officials have questioned why it took so long for reinforcements to arrive and they called for a strengthening of security measures . Some information for this report was provided by AP.
Revised:  United Nations officials have questioned why it took so long for reinforcements to arrive and they called for a strengthening of security measures Some information for this report was provided by AP.
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Original:  Afghan intelligence chief Amrullah Saleh announced the arrests  Saturday.
Revised:  Afghan intelligence chief Amrullah Saleh announced the arrests on Saturday.
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Original:  UN officials have called for a strengthening of security measures after the incident  
Revised:  UN officials have called for a strengthening of security measures after the incident . 
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Original:  UN officials have called for a strengthening of security measures after the incident  
Revised:  UN officials have called for a strengthening of security measures after the incident Related new
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Original:  Alone it would be a Herculean task for Anambra state," commented Egbebik
Revised:  Alone it would be a Herculean task for Anambra state," commented Egbebike
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Original:  Now the EU has begun a second phase of legal action, which could see Britain taken to court.
Revised:  Now the EU has moved to the next stage of legal action, which could see Britain taken to court.
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Original:  The warning follows complaints over the controversial Phorm targeted advertising system.
Revised:  The warning follows complaints over the Phorm company's targeted advertising system.
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Original:  The Phorm technology is designed to track the online activities of internet users, and was tested on some BT customers without their consent     
Revised:  The controversial technology is designed to track the online activities of internet users, and was tested on some BT customers without their consent 
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Original:  The Phorm technology is designed to track the online activities of internet users, and was tested on some BT customers without their consent     
Revised:  The Phorm technology is designed to track the activities of internet users, and was tested on some BT customers without their consent 
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Original:  The Phorm technology is designed to track the online activities of internet users, and was tested on some BT customers without their consent     
Revised:  The Phorm technology is designed to track the online activities of internet users, and was tested on some BT customers without their consent "People's privacy and the integrity of their personal data in the digital world is not only an important matter: it is a fundamental right, protected by European law," the EU's Information Commissioner Viviane Reding said in a statement on Thursday. "I therefore call on the UK authorities to change their national laws to ensure that British citizens fully benefit from the safeguards set out in EU law concerning confidentiality of electronic communications." 
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Original:  However last week the Commission moved onto the second stage of the infringement procedure against Britain , with a letter to the government.
Revised:  However last week the Commission moved onto the second stage of the infringement procedure against the UK , with a letter to the government.
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Original:  It has two months to reply, and if the Commission is not satisfied with the response then Britain could be taken to the European Court of Justice
Revised:  It has two months to reply, and if the Commission is not satisfied with the response then Britain could face charges in the European Court of Justice
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Original:  He is expected to appear before magistrates in a courtroom in Newton Abbot on November 17  2009
Revised:  He is expected to appear before magistrates in a courtroom in Newton Abbot on November 17 , 2009
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Original:  The death of this man brings the current total of UK military personnel killed in Afghanistan up to 224 since 2001.
Revised:  The death brings the current total of UK military personnel killed in Afghanistan up to 224 since 2001.
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Original:  His family has now been told of what has happened and they now ask for a 24-hour time period of grace before releasing any more information.
Revised:  His family has now been told of what has happened and they now ask for a 24-hour time grace period before releasing any more information.
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Original:  A statement released from the Ministry of Defence said the following : " It is with great sadness that the Ministry of Defence must confirm the death of a soldier from the Royal Logistic Corps."
Revised:  A statement released from the Ministry of Defence read : " It is with great sadness that the Ministry of Defence must confirm the death of a soldier from the Royal Logistic Corps."
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Original:  A statement released from the Ministry of Defence said the following : " It is with great sadness that the Ministry of Defence must confirm the death of a soldier from the Royal Logistic Corps."
Revised:  A statement released from the Ministry of Defence said the following : " it is with great sadness that the Ministry of Defence must confirm the death of a soldier from the Royal Logistic Corps."
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Original: A 23-year-old man has been killed in a road accident in the city of Londonderry in Northern Ireland.
Revised: A 23-year-old 
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Original:  The pedestrian was walking along Racecourse Road in the district of Shantallow at around 0220 GMT on Sunday night when he was struck by a black Volkswagen Passat  .
Revised:  pedestrian walking along Racecourse Road in the district of Shantallow at around 0220 GMT on Sunday night when he was struck by a black Volkswagen Passat .
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Original:  The road has now been closed so that investigations can be carried out .
Revised:  The road was closed so that investigations can be carried out .
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Original:  The road has now been closed so that investigations can be carried out .
Revised:  The road has now been closed so that investigations could be carried out .
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Original:  The Police Service of Northern Ireland are now asking any witnesses to contact them as soon as possible  
Revised:  The Police Service of Northern Ireland are now asking any witnesses to contact them as soon as possible . 
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Original: A 23-year-old pedestrian walking along Racecourse road in the city of Londonderry, Shantallow, Northern Ireland at around 0220 GMT on Sunday night when he was struck by a black Volkswagen Passat and has been killed.
Revised: A 23-year-old pedestrian walking along Racecourse Road in the city of Londonderry, Shantallow, Northern Ireland at around 0220 GMT on Sunday night when he was struck by a black Volkswagen Passat and has been killed.
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Original: A 23-year-old pedestrian walking along Racecourse road in the city of Londonderry, Shantallow, Northern Ireland at around 0220 GMT on Sunday night when he was struck by a black Volkswagen Passat and has been killed.
Revised: A 23-year-old pedestrian walking along Racecourse road in the city of Londonderry, Northern Ireland at around 0220 GMT on Sunday night when he was struck by a black Volkswagen Passat and has been killed.
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Original: A 23-year-old pedestrian walking along Racecourse road in the city of Londonderry, Shantallow, Northern Ireland at around 0220 GMT on Sunday night when he was struck by a black Volkswagen Passat and has been killed.
Revised: A 23-year-old pedestrian walking along Racecourse road in the city of Londonderry, Shantallow, Northern Ireland at around 0220 GMT on Sunday night was struck by a black Volkswagen Passat and has been killed.
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Original:  The road was closed so that investigations could be carried out but now the road is open .
Revised:  The road was closed so that investigations could be carried out but has since been reopened .
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Original:  The Police Service of Northern Ireland are now asking any witnesses to contact them as soon as possible.
Revised:  The Police Service of Northern Ireland are asking any witnesses to contact them as soon as possible.
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Original:  Also, there was another accident reported which took place in Newtownhamilton Road in which two 17 year old boys were present .
Revised:  Also, another accident was reported which took place in Newtownhamilton Road in which two 17 year old boys were present .
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Original:  Also, there was another accident reported which took place in Newtownhamilton Road in which two 17 year old boys were present .
Revised:  Also, there was another accident reported which took place in Newtownhamilton Road in which two 17 year old boys were involved .
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Original: (Washington) Iraqi police say four bombs Sunday have killed at least eight people and wounded more than 50 others  . Civilians inspect a damaged car after a car bomb went of in the western city of Ramadi, Iraq, 01 Nov 2009Police say a bomb attached to a bicycle exploded in a popular market in the town of Mussayab, about 60 kilometers south of  Baghdad.
Revised:  Iraqi police say four bombs Sunday have killed at least eight people and wounded more than 50 others . Civilians inspect a damaged car after a car bomb went of in the western city of Ramadi, Iraq, 01 Nov 2009Police say a bomb attached to a bicycle exploded in a popular market in the town of Mussayab, about 60 kilometers south of Baghdad.
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Original: (Washington) Iraqi police say four bombs Sunday have killed at least eight people and wounded more than 50 others  . Civilians inspect a damaged car after a car bomb went of in the western city of Ramadi, Iraq, 01 Nov 2009Police say a bomb attached to a bicycle exploded in a popular market in the town of Mussayab, about 60 kilometers south of  Baghdad.
Revised: (Washington) Iraqi police have said that four bombs Sunday have killed at least eight people and wounded more than 50 others . Civilians inspect a damaged car after a car bomb went of in the western city of Ramadi, Iraq, 01 Nov 2009Police say a bomb attached to a bicycle exploded in a popular market in the town of Mussayab, about 60 kilometers south of Baghdad.
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Original: (Washington) Iraqi police say four bombs Sunday have killed at least eight people and wounded more than 50 others  . Civilians inspect a damaged car after a car bomb went of in the western city of Ramadi, Iraq, 01 Nov 2009Police say a bomb attached to a bicycle exploded in a popular market in the town of Mussayab, about 60 kilometers south of  Baghdad.
Revised: (Washington) Iraqi police say four bombs Sunday have killed at least eight people and wounded more than 50 others . Police id a bomb attached to a bicycle exploded in a popular market in the town of Mussayab, about 60 kilometers south of Baghdad.
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Original: (Washington) Iraqi police say four bombs Sunday have killed at least eight people and wounded more than 50 others  . Civilians inspect a damaged car after a car bomb went of in the western city of Ramadi, Iraq, 01 Nov 2009Police say a bomb attached to a bicycle exploded in a popular market in the town of Mussayab, about 60 kilometers south of  Baghdad.
Revised: (Washington) Iraqi police say four bombs Sunday have killed at least eight people and wounded more than 50 others . Civilians inspect a damaged car after a car bomb went of in the western city of Ramadi, Iraq, 01 Nov 2009Police say a bomb attached to a bicycle exploded in a popular market in the town of Mussayab, about 60 kilometers south of the capital of Baghdad.
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Original:  Meanwhile, police in Ramadi, 100 kilometers west of the capital, say two bombs exploded minutes apart, killing two and wounding four others.
Revised:  Meanwhile, police in Ramadi, 100 kilometers west of the capital, reported that two bombs exploded minutes apart, killing two and wounding four others.
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Original:  An al-Qaida-linked group claimed responsibility for these attacks.
Revised:  An al-Qaeda-linked group claimed responsibility for these attacks.
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Original:  An al-Qaida-linked group claimed responsibility for these attacks.
Revised:  An al-Qaida-linked group claimed responsibility for those attacks.
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Original:  But officials have warned that attacks could rise ahead of elections in January . Some information for this report was provided by AFP, AP and Reuters
Revised:  But officials have warned that attacks could rise ahead of elections in January Some information for this report was provided by AFP, AP and Reuters
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Original:  But officials have warned that attacks could rise ahead of elections in January . Some information for this report was provided by AFP, AP and Reuters
Revised:  But officials have warned that attacks could rise ahead of elections in January . 
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Original:  Meanwhile, police in Ramadi, 100 kilometers ( 32.1 miles) west of the capital, reported that two bombs exploded minutes apart, killing two and wounding four others.
Revised:  Meanwhile, police in Ramadi, 100 kilometers ( 32 miles) west of the capital, reported that two bombs exploded minutes apart, killing two and wounding four others.
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Original:  But officials have warned that attacks could rise ahead of elections in January
Revised:  However, officials have warned that attacks could rise ahead of elections in January
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Original: The accident occured at 7:10 p.  Thursday in an area of military airspace that is sometimes closed to the public, although its status at the time of the acident os not known.
Revised: The accident occured at 7:10 p. m. on Thursday in an area of military airspace that is sometimes closed to the public, although its status at the time of the acident os not known.
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Original:  Operations are currently focusing near the military's San Clemente Island, where an area of about 50 miles of floating wreckage is located  
Revised:  Operations are currently focusing near the military's San Clemente Island, where an area of about 50 miles of floating wreckage is located . 
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Original:  Operations are currently focusing near the military's San Clemente Island, where an area of about 50 miles of floating wreckage is located  
Revised:  Operations are currently focusing near the military's San Clemente Island, where an area of about 50 miles of floating wreckage is located Related new
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Original: Rear Admiral Joseph Castillo said today that the missing air crews are  trained in survival tactics and, " We know they have the ability to survive longer than you might expect."
Revised: Rear Admiral Joseph Castillo said today that the missing air crews are " trained in survival tactics and, " We know they have the ability to survive longer than you might expect."
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Original: The accident occured at 7:10 p.m. on Thursday in an area of military airspace that is sometimes closed to the public, although its status at the time of the acident os not known.
Revised: The accident occurred at 7:10 p.m. on Thursday in an area of military airspace that is sometimes closed to the public, although its status at the time of the acident os not known.
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Original:  However, he also expressed concern that there may not be any survivers . "... hope gets less every day.
Revised:  However, he also expressed concern that there may not be any survivors . "... hope gets less every day.
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Original: Three days after a US Navy helicopter collided with a US Coast Guard airplane off the coast of California  a search and rescue mission is ongoing for the nine crew onboard the two aircraft.
Revised: Three days after a US Navy helicopter collided with a US Coast Guard airplane off the coast of California , a search and rescue mission is ongoing for the nine crew onboard the two aircraft.
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Original:  The accident occurred at 7:10 p.m. on Thursday in an area of military airspace that is sometimes closed to the public, although its status at the time of the acident os not known.
Revised:  The accident occurred at 7:10 p.m. on Thursday in an area of military airspace that is sometimes closed to the public, although its status at the time of the accident was not known.
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Original: (Washington) Tropical Storm Marinae is heading toward central Vietnam after lashing the central Philippines, where authorities say it killed at least 14 people.
Revised:  Tropical Storm Marinae is heading toward central Vietnam after lashing the central Philippines, where authorities say it killed at least 14 people.
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Original:  Residents wade through floodwaters brought about by typhoon Mirinae at Santa Cruz, Laguna province, south of Manila, Philippines , 31 Oct 2009The Philippines National Disaster Coordinating Council said Sunday most of the deaths were reported in Camarines Norte province.
Revised:  The Philippines National Disaster Coordinating Council said Sunday most of the deaths were reported in Camarines Norte province.
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Original:  Residents wade through floodwaters brought about by typhoon Mirinae at Santa Cruz, Laguna province, south of Manila, Philippines , 31 Oct 2009The Philippines National Disaster Coordinating Council said Sunday most of the deaths were reported in Camarines Norte province.
Revised:  Residents wade through floodwaters brought about by typhoon Mirinae at Santa Cruz, Laguna province, south of Manila, Philippines , 31 Oct 2009The Philippines National Disaster Coordinating Council said on Sunday that most of the deaths were reported in Camarines Norte province.
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Original:  It says four people remain missing.
Revised:  It added that four people remain missing.
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Original:  But, authorities say the damage from Marinae was less than the three earlier cyclones Ketsana, Parma and Lupit that battered the Philippines from late September to mid-October, killing more than 900 people.
Revised:  Authorities, however, said that the damage from Marinae was less than the three earlier cyclones Ketsana, Parma and Lupit that battered the Philippines from late September to mid-October, killing more than 900 people.
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Original:  Many areas in the central Philippines remained flooded  Sunday, but that did not stop Filipinos from visiting cemeteries to pay respects to the dead on All Saints Day.
Revised:  Many areas in the central Philippines remained flooded on Sunday, but that did not stop Filipinos from visiting cemeteries to pay respects to the dead on All Saints Day.
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Original:  It is expected to make landfall in central Vietnam on Monday . Some information for this report was provided by AP
Revised:  It is expected to make landfall in central Vietnam on Monday Some information for this report was provided by AP
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Original:  It is expected to make landfall in central Vietnam on Monday . Some information for this report was provided by AP
Revised:  It is expected to make landfall in central Vietnam on Monday . 
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Original:  It is expected to make landfall in central Vietnam on Monday  
Revised:  It is expected to make landfall in central Vietnam on Monday . 
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