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Original: PIMEX is one of the so called video exposure monitoring methods , which are used in occupational hygiene practise since its inception in the mid-1980s Rosen, G.;
Revised: PIMEX is one of the so called video exposure monitoring methods , which are used in occupational hygiene practise since their introduction in the mid-1980s Rosen, G.;
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Original:  The method PIMEX was originally developed in Sweden during the 1980s by Gunnar Rosén and Ing-Marie Andersson  Rosén G, Lundström S. (1987) Concurrent video filming and measuring for visualization of exposure.
Revised:  The method PIMEX was originally developed in Sweden during the 1980s by Gunnar Rosén and Ing-Marie Andersson . Rosén G, Lundström S. (1987) Concurrent video filming and measuring for visualization of exposure.
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Original:  33: 137–44. . Similar technique was developed also in USA where NIOSH researchers described a technique using a video overlay board and computer program to display, in real-time or after recording of data and video on tape, the measured value as a bar graph and the picture on the computer screenGressel M, Heitbrink WA, McGlothlin JD et al. (1987) Realtime, integrated, and ergonomic analysis of dust exposure during manual materials handling.
Revised:  33: 137–44. Similar technique was developed also in USA where NIOSH researchers described a technique using a video overlay board and computer program to display, in real-time or after recording of data and video on tape, the measured value as a bar graph and the picture on the computer screenGressel M, Heitbrink WA, McGlothlin JD et al. (1987) Realtime, integrated, and ergonomic analysis of dust exposure during manual materials handling.
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Original:  33: 137–44. . Similar technique was developed also in USA where NIOSH researchers described a technique using a video overlay board and computer program to display, in real-time or after recording of data and video on tape, the measured value as a bar graph and the picture on the computer screenGressel M, Heitbrink WA, McGlothlin JD et al. (1987) Realtime, integrated, and ergonomic analysis of dust exposure during manual materials handling.
Revised:  33: 137–44. . Similar technique was developed also in USA where NIOSH researchers described a technique using a video overlay board and computer program to display, in real-time or after recording of data and video on tape, the measured value as a bar graph and the picture on the computer screen.Gressel M, Heitbrink WA, McGlothlin JD et al. (1987) Realtime, integrated, and ergonomic analysis of dust exposure during manual materials handling.
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Original:  3: 316– 20.
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Original:  Video exposure monitoring has thereafter been further developed and used in a number of countries  Walsh PT, Clark RDR, Flaherty S et al.
Revised:  Video exposure monitoring has thereafter been further developed and used in a number of countries . Walsh PT, Clark RDR, Flaherty S et al.
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Original:  10: 23–8. . PIMEX is used in  different countries.
Revised:  10: 23–8. PIMEX is used in different countries.
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Original:  10: 23–8. . PIMEX is used in  different countries.
Revised:  10: 23–8. . PIMEX is used in many different countries.
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Original:  There are more than 100 professional videos made with PIMEx for all different industries/branches .
Revised:  There are more than 100 professional videos made with PIMEx for many different industries .
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Original:  There is a variability of situations where PIMEX has been used: - Training workers to use PPE and control measurements in the right way;
Revised:  There are a number of situations where PIMEX has been used: - Training workers to use PPE and control measurements in the right way;
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Original:  There is a variability of situations where PIMEX has been used: - Training workers to use PPE and control measurements in the right way;
Revised:  There is a variability of situations where PIMEX has been used: To train workers to use PPE and control measurements in the right way;
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Original:  - To enlarge the knowledge of chemical risks and to motivate workers of management to use safe working procedures or to take measures;
Revised:  To enlarge the knowledge of chemical risks and to motivate workers of management to use safe working procedures or to take measures;
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Original:  - Workplace analyses (hazard identification);
Revised:  Workplace analyses (hazard identification);
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Original:  - Visualization of a good practice method The best way to gain the result of using PIMEX in the Netherlandsis to see (www.ects.nl).
Revised:  Visualization of a good practice method The best way to gain the result of using PIMEX in the Netherlandsis to see (www.ects.nl).
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Original:  For small and medium enterprises (SME) the method is easily available: within a half day workplace analyses or /and simple videos can be made.
Revised:  For small and medium enterprises by the use of a half day workplace analyses or /and simple videos can be made.
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Original:  For small and medium enterprises (SME) the method is easily available: within a half day workplace analyses or /and simple videos can be made.
Revised:  For small and medium enterprises (SME) the method is easily available: within a half day workplace analysis or simple videos can be made.
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Original:   PIMEX is also used to visualize noise, heat stress, nanoparticles, electromagnetic fields and physical load.
Revised:  ECTS PIMEX is also used to visualize noise, heat stress, nanoparticles, electromagnetic fields and physical load.
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Original:  The video shows the difference in exposure between using the hoist in the wrong and proper way, for example when the wheels are in the wrong or right position.
Revised:  The video shows the difference in exposure between using the hoist in the wrong and the correct way, for example when the wheels are in the wrong or right position.
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Original:  PIMEX in Dalarna University URL Exposure visualisation in Health and Safety Laboratory URL Arbo Unie, the Netherlands URL Cooperation Centre, Germany URL
Revised:  PIMEX in Dalarna University Exposure visualisation in Health and Safety Laboratory URL Arbo Unie, the Netherlands URL Cooperation Centre, Germany URL
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Original:  PIMEX in Dalarna University URL Exposure visualisation in Health and Safety Laboratory URL Arbo Unie, the Netherlands URL Cooperation Centre, Germany URL
Revised:  PIMEX in Dalarna University URL Exposure visualisation in Health and Safety Laboratory Arbo Unie, the Netherlands URL Cooperation Centre, Germany URL
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Original:  PIMEX in Dalarna University URL Exposure visualisation in Health and Safety Laboratory URL Arbo Unie, the Netherlands URL Cooperation Centre, Germany URL
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Original:  PIMEX in Dalarna University URL Exposure visualisation in Health and Safety Laboratory URL Arbo Unie, the Netherlands URL Cooperation Centre, Germany URL
Revised:  PIMEX in Dalarna University URL Exposure visualisation in Health and Safety Laboratory URL Arbo Unie, the Netherlands URL Cooperation Centre, Germany 
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Original:  It is defined as the proportion of improoved patients in the treatment group, divided by the proportion of improved patients control group.
Revised:  It is defined as the proportion of improved patients in the treatment group, divided by the proportion of improved patients control group.
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Original:  It is defined as the proportion of improved patients in the treatment group, divided by the proportion of improved patients  control group.
Revised:  It is defined as the proportion of improved patients in the treatment group, divided by the proportion of improved patients in the control group.
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Original:  Anderson (1976) "Mail Questionnaire Response Rates: Updating Outmoded Thinking", The Journal of Marketing, 40 (1), 71-73 jstor|1250681
Revised:  Anderson (1976) "Mail Questionnaire Response Rates: Updating Outmoded Thinking", The Journal of Marketing, 40 (1), 71-73 
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Original: Response-rate ratio is a measure of efficacy of the therapy in clinical trials.
Revised: Response-rate ratio is a measure of efficacy of therapy in clinical trials.
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Original: Living people Category:Writers from Pangasinan Category:Ilocano-language writers Category:National Artists of the Philippines Jose, Franciso Sionil  Category:Filipino novelists Category:Filipino male short story writers Category:Filipino short story writers Category:Ramon Magsaysay Award winners Category:Chevaliers of the Ordre des Arts et des Lettres Category:Recipients of the Order of the Sacred Treasure, 3rd class Category:Ilocano people Category:The Philippine Star peop
Revised: Living people Category:Writers from Pangasinan Category:Ilocano-language writers Category:National Artists of the Philippines Jose, Franciso Sionil Jose, Franciso Sionil Category:Filipino novelists Category:Filipino male short story writers Category:Filipino short story writers Category:Ramon Magsaysay Award winners Category:Chevaliers of the Ordre des Arts et des Lettres Category:Recipients of the Order of the Sacred Treasure, 3rd class Category:Ilocano people Category:The Philippine Star peop
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Original: Francisco Sionil José (born 3 December 1924) is one of the most widely read Filipino writers in the English language  .
Revised: Francisco Sionil José (born 3 December 1924) is a has-been Filipino writer in the English language .
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Original: Francisco Sionil José (born 3 December 1924) is bitter of Maria Ress and is one of the most widely read Filipino writers in the English language.
Revised: Francisco Sionil José (born 3 December 1924) is bitter of Maria Ressa and is one of the most widely read Filipino writers in the English language.
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Original: Francisco Sionil José (born 3 December 1924) is bitter of Maria Ressa and is one of the most widely read Filipino writers in the English language.
Revised: Francisco Sionil José (born 3 December 1924) is one of the most widely read Filipino writers in the English language.
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Original: The King Section 1 of the Act repealed the Executive Authority (External Relations) Act 1936.
Revised: British monarch Section 1 of the Act repealed the Executive Authority (External Relations) Act 1936.
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Original:  By doing so the Act abolished the last remaining functions of the King, then George VI , in relation to the Irish state.
Revised:  By doing so the Act abolished the last remaining functions of the British monarch ( then George VI , in relation to the Irish state.
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Original:  By doing so the Act abolished the last remaining functions of the King, then George VI , in relation to the Irish state.
Revised:  By doing so the Act abolished the last remaining functions of the King, then George VI ) in relation to the Irish state.
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Original:  On the day the Act came into force, 18 April 1949, King George VI sent the following message to the President of Ireland, Seán T. O'Kelly:The Times, 18 April 1949 Background At any rate, the Act was enacted with all parties voting for it.
Revised:  Background At any rate, the Act was enacted with all parties voting for it.
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Original: United Kingdom's response The United Kingdom responded to the Republic of Ireland Act by enacting the Ireland Act 1949.
Revised: Response United Kingdom The United Kingdom responded to the Republic of Ireland Act by enacting the Ireland Act 1949.
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Original: The Republic of Ireland Act 1948 (No. 22 of 1948) is an Act of the Oireachtas which declared that Ireland may be officially described as the Republic of Ireland, and vested in the President of Ireland the power to exercise the executive authority of the state in its external relations, on the advice of the Government of Ireland.
Revised: The Republic of Ireland Act 1948 (No. 22 of 1948) is an Act of the Oireachtas which declared that Ireland may be officially described as the Republic of Ireland, and vested in the president of Ireland the power to exercise the executive authority of the state in its external relations, on the advice of the Government of Ireland.
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Original:  Text of Act The Republic of Ireland Act is itself quite short, running to just five brief sections, and is therefore set out in full as follows: The Commonwealth At the time the Act came into force, the view of the Irish Taoiseach whose government brought in the Act was that Ireland did not have a King and had not been a member of the Commonwealth since 1936.
Revised:  Text of Act The Republic of Ireland Act consists of five brief sections, and is therefore set out in full as follows: The Commonwealth At the time the Act came into force, the view of the Irish Taoiseach whose government brought in the Act was that Ireland did not have a King and had not been a member of the Commonwealth since 1936.
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Original:  Text of Act The Republic of Ireland Act is itself quite short, running to just five brief sections, and is therefore set out in full as follows: The Commonwealth At the time the Act came into force, the view of the Irish Taoiseach whose government brought in the Act was that Ireland did not have a King and had not been a member of the Commonwealth since 1936.
Revised:  Text of Act The Republic of Ireland Act is itself quite short, running to just five brief sections, set out in full as follows: The Commonwealth At the time the Act came into force, the view of the Irish Taoiseach whose government brought in the Act was that Ireland did not have a King and had not been a member of the Commonwealth since 1936.
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Original:  Wednesday, 24 November 1948 where he said " " We were not since 1936 a member of the Commonwealth of Nations . " His Government 's view was that Ireland was already a republic and that the Act would not create a republic but rather achieve a "clarification of [Ireland's] constitutional status.
Revised:  Wednesday, 24 November 1948 where he said " We were not since 1936 a member of the Commonwealth of Nations . " His Government 's view was that Ireland was already a republic and that the Act would not create a republic but rather achieve a "clarification of [Ireland's] constitutional status.
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Original:  Wednesday, 24 November 1948 where he said " " We were not since 1936 a member of the Commonwealth of Nations . " His Government 's view was that Ireland was already a republic and that the Act would not create a republic but rather achieve a "clarification of [Ireland's] constitutional status.
Revised:  Wednesday, 24 November 1948 where he said " " We were not since 1936 a member of the Commonwealth of Nations " His Government 's view was that Ireland was already a republic and that the Act would not create a republic but rather achieve a "clarification of [Ireland's] constitutional status.
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Original:  Wednesday, 24 November 1948 where he said " " We were not since 1936 a member of the Commonwealth of Nations . " His Government 's view was that Ireland was already a republic and that the Act would not create a republic but rather achieve a "clarification of [Ireland's] constitutional status.
Revised:  Wednesday, 24 November 1948 where he said " " We were not since 1936 a member of the Commonwealth of Nations . " . His government 's view was that Ireland was already a republic and that the Act would not create a republic but rather achieve a "clarification of [Ireland's] constitutional status.
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Original:  Until Ireland brought the Act into force, it was still regarded by the members as forming part of “ His Majesty’s dominions ” . When Ireland adopted its 1937 Constitution, which made no reference to the King, the United Kingdom Government announced that it and the other Commonwealth Governments were "[still] prepared to treat ...
Revised:  Until Ireland brought the Act into force, it was still regarded by the members as forming part of " His Majesty’s dominions ” . When Ireland adopted its 1937 Constitution, which made no reference to the King, the United Kingdom Government announced that it and the other Commonwealth Governments were "[still] prepared to treat ...
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Original:  Until Ireland brought the Act into force, it was still regarded by the members as forming part of “ His Majesty’s dominions ” . When Ireland adopted its 1937 Constitution, which made no reference to the King, the United Kingdom Government announced that it and the other Commonwealth Governments were "[still] prepared to treat ...
Revised:  Until Ireland brought the Act into force, it was still regarded by the members as forming part of “ His Majesty’s dominions " . When Ireland adopted its 1937 Constitution, which made no reference to the King, the United Kingdom Government announced that it and the other Commonwealth Governments were "[still] prepared to treat ...
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Original:  Until Ireland brought the Act into force, it was still regarded by the members as forming part of “ His Majesty’s dominions ” . When Ireland adopted its 1937 Constitution, which made no reference to the King, the United Kingdom Government announced that it and the other Commonwealth Governments were "[still] prepared to treat ...
Revised:  Until Ireland brought the Act into force, it was still regarded by the members as forming part of “ His Majesty’s dominions ” . When Ireland adopted its 1937 Constitution, which made no reference to the King, the United Kingdom Government announced that it and the other Commonwealth Governments were "[still] prepared to treat …
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Original:  Ireland, as a member of the British Commonwealth of Nations .” Opposition leader Éamon de Valera speaking in the Dáil's The Republic of Ireland Bill, 1948—Second Stage;
Revised:  Ireland, as a member of the British Commonwealth of Nations ". Opposition leader Éamon de Valera speaking in the Dáil's The Republic of Ireland Bill, 1948—Second Stage;
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Original:  we are not establishing a new State ...
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Original:  However, the Irish government opted not to reapply for membership of the Commonwealth, a decision that was criticised by then Leader of the Opposition Éamon de Valera, who considered applying for membership after being returned to power in the 1950s.
Revised:  However, the Irish government did not to reapply for membership of the Commonwealth, a decision that was criticised by then Leader of the Opposition Éamon de Valera, who considered applying for membership after being returned to power in the 1950s.
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Original:  However, the Irish government opted not to reapply for membership of the Commonwealth, a decision that was criticised by then Leader of the Opposition Éamon de Valera, who considered applying for membership after being returned to power in the 1950s.
Revised:  However, the Irish government opted not to reapply for membership of the Commonwealth, a decision that was criticised by then Leader of the Opposition Éamon de Valera, who considered applying for membership after his return to office in the 1950s.
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Original:  Section 2 of the Act quite simply provides: Notably, the Act did not change the official name of the state .
Revised:  Section 2 of the Act provides: Notably, the Act did not change the official name of the state .
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Original:  Section 2 of the Act quite simply provides: Notably, the Act did not change the official name of the state .
Revised:  Section 2 of the Act quite simply provides: The Act did not change the official name of the state .
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Original:  The Constitution of Ireland provides that Éire (or Ireland in English) is the official name of the State and, if the Act had purported to change the name, it would have been unconstitutional as it was not a constitutional amendment.
Revised:  The Constitution of Ireland provides that Éire (or Ireland in English) is the official name of the State and, if the act had purported to change the name, it would have been unconstitutional as it was not a constitutional amendment.
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Original:  The Taoiseach, John A. Costello, who introduced the Republic of Ireland Bill in the Oireachtas, explained the difference in the following way: In 1945, when asked if he planned to declare a Republic , the then Taoiseach Éamon de Valera had replied, "we are a republic","Seanad Éireann - Volume 30 - 19 July, 1945" Office of the Houses of the Oireachtas.
Revised:  The Taoiseach, John A. Costello, who introduced the Republic of Ireland Bill in the Oireachtas, explained the difference in the following way: In 1945, when asked if he planned to declare a republic , the then Taoiseach Éamon de Valera had replied, "we are a republic","Seanad Éireann - Volume 30 - 19 July, 1945" Office of the Houses of the Oireachtas.
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Original:  Retrieved on 14 March 2007. having refused to say so before for eight years.
Revised:  Retrieved on 14 March 2007. which he had not said in the previous eight years.
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Original:  He also insisted that Ireland had no king, but simply used an external king as an organ in international affairs.
Revised:  He also insisted that Ireland had no king, but simply used an external king as an "organ" in international affairs.
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Original:  In October 1947, de Valera asked his Attorney-General , Cearbhall Ó Dálaigh, to draft a bill to repeal the External Relations Act. and by 1948 a draft of the bill included a reference to the state as being a republic.
Revised:  In October 1947, de Valera asked the attorney-general , Cearbhall Ó Dálaigh, to draft a bill to repeal the External Relations Act. and by 1948 a draft of the bill included a reference to the state as being a republic.
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Original:  David McCullagh has suggested that it was a spur of the moment reaction to offence caused by the Governor-General of Canada, McCullagh, David The Reluctant Taoiseach Gill and Macmillan 2010 p.210 Lord Alexander, who was of Northern Irish descent, who allegedly placed loyalist symbols, notably a replica of the famous Roaring Meg cannon used in the Siege of Derry, before an affronted Costello at a state dinner.
Revised:  David McCullagh has suggested that it was a spur of the moment reaction to offence caused by the Governor-General of Canada, Lord Alexander, who was of Northern Irish descent, who allegedly placed loyalist symbols, notably a replica of the famous Roaring Meg cannon used in the Siege of Derry, before an affronted Costello at a state dinner.
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Original:  McCullagh p.210 The Irish position was that a toast to the King, instead of representing both countries, would not include Ireland.
Revised:  The Irish position was that a toast to the King, instead of representing both countries, would not include Ireland.
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Original:  McCullagh pp.205-7 Costello's revelation of the decision was because the Sunday Independent (an Irish newspaper) had discovered the fact and was about to "break" the story as an exclusive.
Revised:  Costello's revelation of the decision was because the Sunday Independent (an Irish newspaper) had discovered the fact and was about to "break" the story as an exclusive.
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Original:  McCullagh pp.179-80 Rather than entrust the minute-taking to Moynihan, the cabinet entrusted it to a Parliamentary Secretary (junior minister), Liam Cosgrave.
Revised:  Rather than entrust the minute-taking to Moynihan, the cabinet entrusted it to a Parliamentary Secretary (junior minister), Liam Cosgrave.
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