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Original:  The main villages of shekh ali URL Jarf, Kajak, Jaukool, Bed: Daikakalan People - Jarf is the hometown of a well known disability rights advocate and disarmament campaigner Firoz Alizada, who leads campaign branch of the 1997 Nobel Peace Prize Laureate, the International Campaign to Ban Landmines in Geneva Nerkh Naiman people Nawi: the hometown of Sayed Hussein Anwari - the ex-minister of agriculture and ex-governor of Herat province.
Revised:  The main villages of shekh ali URL Jarf, Kajak, Jaukool, Bed: Daikakalan People - Jarf is the hometown of a well known disability rights advocate and anti-disarmament campaigner Firoz Alizada, who leads campaign branch of the 1997 Nobel Peace Prize Laureate, the International Campaign to Ban Landmines in Geneva Nerkh Naiman people Nawi: the hometown of Sayed Hussein Anwari - the ex-minister of agriculture and ex-governor of Herat province.
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Original: Sheikh Ali is a district in Parwan Province in Afghanistan  which is inhabited with ethnic Hazaras and sadat .
Revised: Sheikh Ali is a district in Parwan Province in Afghanistan , which is inhabited with ethnic Hazaras and sadat .
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Original: Sheikh Ali is a district in Parwan Province in Afghanistan  which is inhabited with ethnic Hazaras and sadat .
Revised: Sheikh Ali is a district in Parwan Province in Afghanistan which is inhabited with ethnic Hazara .
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Original:  the 1970s "Hawaiian Renaissance" movement and the disappearance of its legendary leader, activist George Helm of Protect Kaho'olawe Ohana (PKO);
Revised:  the 1970s "Hawaiian Renaissance" movement and the disappearance of its legendary cultural icon George Helm of Protect Kaho'olawe Ohana (PKO);
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Original:   His second novel, For A Song (2012), blended noir, mystery, and detective-fiction genre techniques , against the backdrop of political scandal and police corruption in 1970s Honolulu.
Revised:  His second novel, For A Song (2012), blends noir, mystery, and detective-fiction genre techniques , against the backdrop of political scandal and police corruption in 1970s Honolulu.
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Original:   His second novel, For A Song (2012), blended noir, mystery, and detective-fiction genre techniques , against the backdrop of political scandal and police corruption in 1970s Honolulu.
Revised:  His second novel, For A Song (2012), blended noir, mystery, and detective-fiction genre tropes , against the backdrop of political scandal and police corruption in 1970s Honolulu.
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Original:  Morales has spoken about how he uses local Hawaii, historical and journalistic research to breathe life into his characters.
Revised:  Morales has given public talks about how he uses local Hawaii, historical and journalistic research to breathe life into his characters.
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Original:  Morales won the  Grand Prize of the prestigious Honolulu Magazine Fiction Contest twice.
Revised:  Morales won the prestigious Grand Prize of the prestigious Honolulu Magazine Fiction Contest twice.
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Original:  Morales won the  Grand Prize of the prestigious Honolulu Magazine Fiction Contest twice.
Revised:  Morales won the Grand Prize of the Honolulu Magazine Fiction Contest twice.
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Original:  He formed his first "Hard Metal Rock" group Denizen  in 1995 and played that year in "Battle of the Bands" in Stellenbosch, and also at Woodstock in Oudtshoorn.
Revised:  He formed his first "Hard Metal Rock" group Denizen , in 1995 and played that year in "Battle of the Bands" in Stellenbosch, and also at Woodstock in Oudtshoorn.
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Original:  He formed his first "Hard Metal Rock" group Denizen  in 1995 and played that year in "Battle of the Bands" in Stellenbosch, and also at Woodstock in Oudtshoorn.
Revised:  He formed his first "Hard Metal Rock" group Denizen in 1995 and participated that year in "Battle of the Bands" in Stellenbosch, and also at Woodstock in Oudtshoorn.
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Original:  Etienne has always written his own songs  .
Revised:  Etienne writes his own songs .
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Original:  Etienne has always written his own songs  .
Revised:  Etienne has always written his own songs , and has since the begining .
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Original:  Etienne's peak with this group was their popular song Sugar Me Up Lollipo  which became a hit in South Africa.
Revised:  Etienne's peak with this group was their popular song Sugar Me Up Lollipo , which became a hit in South Africa.
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Original: Nursing in Islam is a healthcare services related to caring patient, individual, family and community as manifestation of love for Allah and the Prophet Muhammad.
Revised: Nursing in Islam is a healthcare services related to caring patient, individual, family and community as manifestation of love for Allah and Muhammad.
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Original:  Ethos of Health Care Service In Islamic traditions caring is the manifestation of love for Allah and the Prophet Muhammad.
Revised:  Ethos of Health Care Service In Islamic traditions caring is the manifestation of love for Allah and Muhammad.
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Original: Nursing in Islamis a healthcare services related to caring patient, individual, family and community as manifestation of love for Allah and Muhammad.
Revised: In Islam, nurses provide healthcare services to patients, families and communities as a manifestation of love for Allah and Muhammad.
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Original:  Nursing as profession is not new to Islam.
Revised:  The nursing profession is not new to Islam.
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Original:  In fact, it is attributive to sympathy and responsibility towards the concerned in need.
Revised:  Islamic traditions include sympathy for and responsibility toward those in need.
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Original: This undertaking had started during the development of Islam as a religion, a culture, and civilization.
Revised: This perspective had emerged during the development of Islam as a religion, a culture, and civilization.
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Original: This undertaking had started during the development of Islam as a religion, a culture, and civilization.
Revised: This undertaking had started during the development of Islam as a religion, culture, and civilization.
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Original: First Muslim nurse The first professional nurse in the history of Islam is a woman named Rufaidah bint Sa’ad,  from the Bani Aslam tribe in Medina  .Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012 She lived at the time of Muhammed and was among the first people in Medina to accept Islam.
Revised: First Muslim nurse The first professional nurse in the history of Islam is a woman named Rufaidah bint Sa’ad, also known as Rufaida Al-Aslamia or Rufayda al-Aslamiyyah, who was born in 620 (est.) and lived at the time of Muhammed."Many centuries before Florence Nightingale, this Muslim woman introduced nursing to the Arabic world" She hailed from the Bani Aslam tribe in Medina .Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012 She lived at the time of Muhammed and was among the first people in Medina to accept Islam.
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Original: First Muslim nurse The first professional nurse in the history of Islam is a woman named Rufaidah bint Sa’ad,  from the Bani Aslam tribe in Medina  .Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012 She lived at the time of Muhammed and was among the first people in Medina to accept Islam.
Revised: First Muslim nurse The first professional nurse in the history of Islam is a woman named Rufaidah bint Sa’ad, from the Bani Aslam tribe in Medina and was among the first people in Medina to accept Islam .Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012 She lived at the time of Muhammed and was among the first people in Medina to accept Islam.
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Original: First Muslim nurse The first professional nurse in the history of Islam is a woman named Rufaidah bint Sa’ad,  from the Bani Aslam tribe in Medina  .Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012 She lived at the time of Muhammed and was among the first people in Medina to accept Islam.
Revised: First Muslim nurse The first professional nurse in the history of Islam is a woman named Rufaidah bint Sa’ad, from the Bani Aslam tribe in Medina .Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012.
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Original:   After the Muslim state was established in Medina, she would treat the ill in her tent set up outside the mosque  .Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (2008-05-17) Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medicines Forum, retrieved April 26, 2010 During times of war, she would lead a group of volunteers to the battlefield and would treat casualties and injured soldiers.
Revised:  After the Muslim state was established in Medina, she would treat the ill in her tent set up outside the mosque .Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (2008-05-17) Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medicines Forum, retrieved April 26, 2010 
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Original: Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012.
Revised: Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in IslamIslamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012.
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Original: Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012.
Revised: Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (November 1998) 9811 - Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medical Education Resources, retrieved January 3, 2012 .
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Original: Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (2008-05-17) Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in Islam Islamic Medicines Forum, retrieved April 26, 2010 Rufaidah is described as a woman possessing the qualities of an ideal nurse: compassionate, empathetic, a good leader and a great teacher.
Revised: Kasule, Omar Hasan Sr. (2008-05-17) Historical Roots of the Nursing Profession in IslamIslamic Medicines Forum, retrieved April 26, 2010 Rufaidah is described as a woman possessing the qualities of an ideal nurse: compassionate, empathetic, a good leader and a great teacher.
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Original:  In short, health care is deemed as service to the patients and to Allah, as opposed to other professions that are commercial-based .
Revised:  In short, health care is deemed a service to the patients and to Allah, as opposed to other professions that are commercial-based .
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Original:  In short, health care is deemed as service to the patients and to Allah, as opposed to other professions that are commercial-based .
Revised:  In short, health care is deemed as service to the patients and to Allah, as opposed to other professions that are commercial .
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Original: Luis Jorge Mayser Ardaya ( b. July 21, 1928, San Ignacio de Velasco, Santa Cruz) is a Bolivian politician.
Revised: Luis Jorge Mayser Ardaya ( born July 21, 1928, San Ignacio de Velasco, Santa Cruz) is a Bolivian politician.
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Original: In 2004 Mayser was awarded the title "hijo ilustre" by the Santa Cruz de la Sierra municipal council, for his role in founding the Comité Pro Santa URL Bibliography Mayser is the author of Alto Paragua: Verdaderas Guerrillas Bolivianas, an account of the struggle of the FSB against the Revolutionary Nationalist Movement government.
Revised: In 2004 Mayser was awarded the title "hijo ilustre" by the Santa Cruz de la Sierra municipal council, for his role in founding the Comité Pro Santa Cruz. Bibliography Mayser is the author of Alto Paragua: Verdaderas Guerrillas Bolivianas, an account of the struggle of the FSB against the Revolutionary Nationalist Movement government.
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Original: Vigilance decrement Vigilance decrement is defined as "deterioration in the ability to remain vigilant for critical signals with time, as indicated by a decline in the rate of the correct detection of signals".
Revised: Vigilance decrement is defined as "deterioration in the ability to remain vigilant for critical signals with time, as indicated by a decline in the rate of the correct detection of signals".
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Original: Vigilance decrement  is defined as "deterioration in the ability to remain vigilant for critical signals with time, as indicated by a decline in the rate of the correct detection of signals".
Revised: Vigilance decrement Vigilance decrement is defined as "deterioration in the ability to remain vigilant for critical signals with time, as indicated by a decline in the rate of the correct detection of signals".
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Original:  Mackworth simulated rare irregular events on a radar display by having the test participants watch an unmarked clock face over a 2 hour period.
Revised:  Mackworth simulated rare irregular events on a radar display by having the test participants watch an unmarked clock face over a 2-hour period.
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Original:  A decision maker can vary their sensitivity , characterized by d' , to allow more or less correct detections, but at the respective cost of more or less false alarms.
Revised:  A decision maker can vary their response bias , characterized by d' , to allow more or less correct detections, but at the respective cost of more or less false alarms.
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Original:  The location of his remains remains unknown.
Revised:  The location of his remains is unknown.
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Original:  7 April?, 1892/1899/1901 – 5 September 1926) was a  Russian-born Romanian communist activist, a leading member of the communist movements of Bessarabia and Romania in the 1920s.
Revised:  7 April?, 1892/1899/1901 – 5 September 1926) was a Imperial Russian-born Romanian communist activist, a leading member of the communist movements of Bessarabia and Romania in the 1920s.
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Original:  Tcacenco received the task to restore the organisation, and in October 1919 he was elected secretary of the Chișinău communist committee.
Revised:  Tcacenco received the task of restoring the organisation, and in October 1919 he was elected secretary of the Chișinău communist committee.
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Original:  Tcacenco was one of the founders of an illegal typography in Chișinău, and was the editor of Bolşevicul basarabean ("The Bessarabian Bolshevik", in Moldavian), and Bessarabskiy kommunist ("The Bessarabian Communist", in Russian).
Revised:  Tcacenco was one of the founders of an illegal typography in Chișinău, and was the editor of Bolșevicul basarabean ("The Bessarabian Bolshevik", in Moldavian), and Bessarabskiy kommunist ("The Bessarabian Communist", in Russian).
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Original:  Tcacenco succeeded in escaping custody on 17 August 1920, leaving for Iaşi .
Revised:  Tcacenco succeeded in escaping custody on 17 August 1920, leaving for Iași .
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Original:  In Iaşi, Pavel Tcacenco assisted in the organisation of the still chaotic local workers' movement.
Revised:  In Iași, Tcacenco assisted in the organisation of the still chaotic local workers' movement.
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Original:  In March 1921 he participated at the Iaşi Conference of communist organisation , and was elected in the central committee of the Conference.
Revised:  In March 1921 he participated at the Iași Conference of communist organisation , and was elected in the central committee of the Conference.
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Original:  In March 1921 he participated at the Iaşi Conference of communist organisation , and was elected in the central committee of the Conference.
Revised:  In March 1921 he participated at the Iaşi Conference of communist organisations , and was elected in the central committee of the Conference.
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Original:  Tcacenco was included in the group of communist tried in the Dealul Spirii Trial (January–June 1922), when the National-Liberal government attempted to eliminate the Communist Party by making it responsible for a bomb attack on the Romanian Senate by anarchist Max Goldstein.
Revised:  Tcacenco was included in the group of communists tried in the Dealul Spirii Trial (January–June 1922), when the National-Liberal government attempted to eliminate the Communist Party by making it responsible for a bomb attack on the Romanian Senate by anarchist Max Goldstein.
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Original:  During the trial, Pavel Tcacenco acknowledged he had participated in distributing communist newspapers and manifestos, but denied any connection with the bomb attack.
Revised:  During the trial, Tcacenco acknowledged he had participated in distributing communist newspapers and manifestos, but denied any connection with the bomb attack.
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Original:  Back in Constanţa , the court decided his 1921 activities had a political character, thus falling under the royal amnesty of 1922.
Revised:  Back in Constanța , the court decided his 1921 activities had a political character, thus falling under the royal amnesty of 1922.
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Original:  Legacy After World War II, as the Romanian Communist Party gained the power in Romania, Tcacenco was honoured by the official propaganda along other young communists killed by the previous Romanian governments.
Revised:  Legacy After World War II, as the Romanian Communist Party gained power in Romania, Tcacenco was honoured by the official propaganda along other young communists killed by the previous Romanian governments.
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Original: Venacio Concepción was a former Filipino general under the leadership of Emilio Aguinaldo.
Revised: Venancio Concepción was a former Filipino general under the leadership of Emilio Aguinaldo.
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Original:  In 1920, he was tried and convicted of fraud., page 444.
Revised:  However, in 1920, he was tried and convicted of fraud., page 444.
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Original: Venancio Concepción was a former Filipino general under the leadership of  Emilio Aguinaldo.
Revised: Venancio Concepción was a Filipino general under the leadership of Emilio Aguinaldo.
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Original: Venancio Concepción was a former Filipino general under the leadership of  Emilio Aguinaldo.
Revised: Venancio Concepción was a former Filipino general under the leadership of President Emilio Aguinaldo.
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Original:  After almost 12 decades since it was first commissioned, the BSP Magat Salamat is still in part of the fleet of the Philippine Navy.
Revised:  After almost 12 years since it was first commissioned, the BSP Magat Salamat is still in part of the fleet of the Philippine Navy.
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Original: Magat Salamat (1550–1589?), Participant in the Tondo Conspiracy , nhi.gov.ph and thus held the title of Datu under his cousin and co-conspirator Agustin de Legazpi, who had been proclaimed paramount ruler (ruler over other Datus) of Indianized kingdom of Tondo after the death of Lakandula, although the position soon became little more than a courtesy title.
Revised: Magat Salamat (1550–1589?), Participant in the Tondo Conspiracy , nhi.gov.ph and thus held the title of Datu under his cousin and co-conspirator Agustin de Legazpi, who had been proclaimed paramount ruler (ruler over other datus) of indianized kingdom of Tondo after the death of Lakandula, although the position soon became little more than a courtesy title.
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Original:  Originally named as the USS Gayety under the United States during 1942 and renamed to BSP Magat Salamat (Bapor ng Republika ng Pilipinas) when it was acquired by the Philippine Navy in 1976.
Revised:  Originally named as the USS Gayety under the United States during 1942 and renamed to BRP Magat Salamat (Bapor ng Republika ng Pilipinas) when it was acquired by the Philippine Navy in 1976.
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Original:  After almost 12 years since it was first commissioned, the BSP Magat Salamat is still in part of the fleet of the Philippine Navy.
Revised:  After almost 12 years since it was first commissioned, the BRP Magat Salamat is still in part of the fleet of the Philippine Navy.
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Original: Motives for conflict As the Spaniards continued to strengthen their grip on the Philippines, they introduced new elements meant to subjugate the Filipino people, such as Catholicism.
Revised: Motives for conflict As the Spaniards continued to strengthen their grip on th Philippines, they introduced new elements meant to subjugate the Filipino people, such as Catholicism.
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Original: Early life At a very young age, Magat Salamat had already witnessed and experienced the abuses of the Spanish invaders firsthand.
Revised: Early life Ot a very young age, Magat Salamat had already witnessed and experienced the abuses of the Spanish invaders firsthand.
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Original: Early life Ot a very young age, Magat Salamat had already witnessed and experienced the abuses of the Spanish invaders firsthand.
Revised: Early life From a very young age, Magat Salamat had already witnessed and experienced the abuses of the Spanish invaders firsthand.
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Original: Magat Salamat (1550–1589?), Participant in the Tondo Conspiracy , nhi.gov.ph and thus held the title of Datu under his cousin and co-conspirator Agustin de Legazpi, who had been proclaimed paramount ruler (ruler over other datus) of  indianized kingdom of Tondo after the death of Lakandula, although the position soon became little more than a courtesy title.
Revised: Magat Salamat (1550–1589?), Participant in the Tondo Conspiracy , nhi.gov.ph and thus held the title of Datu under his cousin and co-conspirator Agustin de Legazpi, who had been proclaimed paramount ruler (ruler over other datus) of the indianized kingdom of Tondo after the death of Lakandula, although the position soon became little more than a courtesy title.
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Original:   Sulfur is an essential element for all life, but almost always in the form of organosulfur compounds or metal sulfides.
Revised:  it can be mixed in a blender with charcoal to make gunpowder. Kaboom!! Sulfur is an essential element for all life, but almost always in the form of organosulfur compounds or metal sulfides.
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Original:   Characteristics When burned, sulfur melts to a blood-red liquid and emits a blue flame.
Revised:  It is also used to craft explosives with the use of low grade fuel metal frags gunpowder and a tier 3 workbench. boom a rocket simple as that. Characteristics When burned, sulfur melts to a blood-red liquid and emits a blue flame.
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Original: Sulfur is the tenth most common element by mass in the universe , and the fifth most common on Earth.
Revised: Sulfur is the tenth most common element by mass in the universe and the fifth most common on Earth.
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Original: Sulfur ( in nontechnical British English: sulphur ) is a chemical element with the symbol S and atomic number 16.
Revised: Sulfur ( ) is a chemical element with the symbol S and atomic number 16.
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Original:  The astrological symbol for 2 Pallas, a diamond at the top of a cross (⚴), is a variant for sulfur.
Revised:  The astrological symbol for 2 Pallas, a diamond at the top of a cross (⚴), has been published in various forms, including one that looks like the symbol for sulfur.
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