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Original:  where she falls out with a long-time friend after discovering that she was asked to be-friend her at uni because she was URL TG and the Support Worker where Maz comes to terms with needing and hiring a support worker/ carer whilst keeping her part-time job at a theatre box URL There has also been a one-off 45 minute drama featuring Maz at a chronic pain clinic, first broadcast 30 August URL All of these were written by Lou Ramsden and produced by Charlotte Riches.
Revised:  where she falls out with a long-time friend after discovering that she was asked to be-friend her at uni because she was disabled; TG and the Support Worker where Maz comes to terms with needing and hiring a support worker/ carer whilst keeping her part-time job at a theatre box URL There has also been a one-off 45 minute drama featuring Maz at a chronic pain clinic, first broadcast 30 August URL All of these were written by Lou Ramsden and produced by Charlotte Riches.
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Original:  where she falls out with a long-time friend after discovering that she was asked to be-friend her at uni because she was URL TG and the Support Worker where Maz comes to terms with needing and hiring a support worker/ carer whilst keeping her part-time job at a theatre box URL There has also been a one-off 45 minute drama featuring Maz at a chronic pain clinic, first broadcast 30 August URL All of these were written by Lou Ramsden and produced by Charlotte Riches.
Revised:  where she falls out with a long-time friend after discovering that she was asked to be-friend her at uni because she was URL TG and the Support Worker where Maz comes to terms with needing and hiring a support worker/ carer whilst keeping her part-time job at a theatre box office. There has also been a one-off 45 minute drama featuring Maz at a chronic pain clinic, first broadcast 30 August URL All of these were written by Lou Ramsden and produced by Charlotte Riches.
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Original:  where she falls out with a long-time friend after discovering that she was asked to be-friend her at uni because she was URL TG and the Support Worker where Maz comes to terms with needing and hiring a support worker/ carer whilst keeping her part-time job at a theatre box URL There has also been a one-off 45 minute drama featuring Maz at a chronic pain clinic, first broadcast 30 August URL All of these were written by Lou Ramsden and produced by Charlotte Riches.
Revised:  where she falls out with a long-time friend after discovering that she was asked to be-friend her at uni because she was URL TG and the Support Worker where Maz comes to terms with needing and hiring a support worker/ carer whilst keeping her part-time job at a theatre box URL There has also been a one-off 45 minute drama featuring Maz at a chronic pain clinic, first broadcast 30 August 2019. All of these were written by Lou Ramsden and produced by Charlotte Riches.
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Original: References Editors and ethnicity:A history of the Irish American press 1848-1883, William Leonard Joyce, 1976 The Dynamiters: Irish Nationalism and Political Violence in the Wider World 1867-1900, Niall Whelehan, 2012 The encyclopedia of the Irish in America, ed.
Revised: References Editors and ethnicity:A history of the Irish American press 1848-1883, 1976 The Dynamiters: Irish Nationalism and Political Violence in the Wider World 1867-1900, Niall Whelehan, 2012 The encyclopedia of the Irish in America, ed.
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Original:  Church History 39#4 (1970): 524-540. www.jstor.org/stable/3162930 in JSTOR Dictionary of Irish Biography, pp. 1054–56, Cambridge, 2010.
Revised:  Church History 39#4 (1970): 524-540. in JSTOR Dictionary of Irish Biography, pp. 1054–56, Cambridge, 2010.
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Original: Ford was born in Galway to Edward Ford (1805-1880) and Ann Ford (1815-1893), emigrating with his parents to Boston, USA in 1845, never returning to Ireland.
Revised: Ford was born in Galway to Edward Ford (1805-1880) and Ann Ford (1815-1893), emigrating with his parents to Boston, United States in 1845, never returning to Ireland.
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Original: In 1880, Ford began to solicited donations through the Irish World to support Land League activities in Ireland.
Revised: In 1880, Ford began to solicit donations through the Irish World to support Land League activities in Ireland.
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Original:  British Prime Minister William Gladstone would later state that with the funds from the Irish World, there would have been no agitation in Ireland." "Ireland and the Americas - Culture, Politics and History," Editors James P. Byrne, Philip Coleman, and Jason King, ABC Clio, Santa Barbara, 2008 CA
Revised:  British Prime Minister William Gladstone would later state that without the funds from the Irish World, there would have been no agitation in Ireland." "Ireland and the Americas - Culture, Politics and History," Editors James P. Byrne, Philip Coleman, and Jason King, ABC Clio, Santa Barbara, 2008 CA
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Original: Arriving in Montreal, Canada  in 1967, Yaya graduated from the University of Montreal in Chemistry in 1973.
Revised: Arriving in Montreal, Canada , in 1967, Yaya graduated from the University of Montreal in Chemistry in 1973.
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Original:  He was a seasonal lecturer at Carlton University, teaching Aural Training I & II from 1987-1992.
Revised:  He was a seasonal lecturer at Carlton University, teaching Aural Training I & II from 1987 to 1992.
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Original:  From 1974-86 , he was a staff member of the Intercultural Institute of Montreal, Canada.
Revised:  From 1974 to 1986 , he was a staff member of the Intercultural Institute of Montreal, Canada.
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Original:  Full Biography In his book, the Healing Drum, Yaya Diallo wrote a lot of things about his mother and her famous family of Zangasso.
Revised:  Biography In his book, the Healing Drum, Yaya Diallo wrote a lot of things about his mother and her famous family of Zangasso.
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Original:  Full Biography In his book, the Healing Drum, Yaya Diallo wrote a lot of things about his mother and her famous family of Zangasso.
Revised:  Full Biography In his book, The Healing Drum, Yaya Diallo wrote a lot of things about his mother and her famous family of Zangasso.
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Original:  He was a specialist of the digestive system and all diseases related to it. he was the mentor of Nia Borotali (the messengers of Nia). he could read and translate the 266 characters of Nia.
Revised:  He was a specialist of the digestive system and all diseases related to it. He was the mentor of Nia Borotali (the messengers of Nia). he could read and translate the 266 characters of Nia.
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Original:  He was a specialist of the digestive system and all diseases related to it. he was the mentor of Nia Borotali (the messengers of Nia). he could read and translate the 266 characters of Nia.
Revised:  He was a specialist of the digestive system and all diseases related to it. he was the mentor of Nia Borotali (the messengers of Nia). He could read and translate the 266 characters of Nia.
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Original:  In Africa, it is a blessing to have the last word of one’s dying father, and Yaya Diallo had it and participated in the funerals.
Revised:  In Africa, it is a blessing to have the last word of one’s dying father, and Yaya had it and participated in the funerals.
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Original:  Yaya Diallo’s mother died the 2nd of February 1997. 1.3 Nomadic Life Each male child in Diallo’s family from the age of four to twenty-one years had to live a nomadic life;
Revised:  Yaya Diallo’s mother died on 2 February 1997. 1.3 Nomadic Life Each male child in Diallo’s family from the age of four to twenty-one years had to live a nomadic life;
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Original:  Yaya Diallo’s mother died the 2nd of February 1997. 1.3 Nomadic Life Each male child in Diallo’s family from the age of four to twenty-one years had to live a nomadic life;
Revised:  Yaya Diallo’s mother died the 2nd of February 1997. 1.3 Nomadic life Each male child in Diallo’s family from the age of four to twenty-one years had to live a nomadic life;
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Original:  Yaya Diallo’s mother died the 2nd of February 1997. 1.3 Nomadic Life Each male child in Diallo’s family from the age of four to twenty-one years had to live a nomadic life;
Revised:  Yaya Diallo’s mother died the 2nd of February 1997. 1.3 Nomadic Life Each male child in Diallo’s family from the age of four to 21 years had to live a nomadic life;
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Original:  Each female child lived nomadically from age six until she was married at sixteen or after.
Revised:  Each female child lived nomadically from the age of six until she was married at sixteen or after.
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Original:  Each female child lived nomadically from age six until she was married at sixteen or after.
Revised:  Each female child lived nomadically from age six until she was married at 16 or after.
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Original:  this is natural selection. he should have some basic needs: Listening- he had to know the sound of hungry lions, hyenas, etc.;
Revised:  this is natural selection. He should have some basic needs: Listening- he had to know the sound of hungry lions, hyenas, etc.;
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Original:  Yaya Diallo knows how to cure or stop the symptoms of some illnesses: diarrhea, flu, headaches, and the bites or stings of scorpions, snakes, bees, and wasps. 1.4 Family Values To be a successful man, one should put a lot of big, heavy necklaces around his wife’s neck.
Revised:  Yaya Diallo knows how to cure or stop the symptoms of some illnesses: diarrhea, flu, headaches, and the bites or stings of scorpions, snakes, bees, and wasps. 1.4 Family values To be a successful man, one should put a lot of big, heavy necklaces around his wife’s neck.
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Original:  At the school of Nature, Yaya Diallo had time to observe and learn.
Revised:  At the school of Nature, Diallo had time to observe and learn.
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Original:  All those factors justified why Yaya Diallo was a good biology student and his interests in medical herbs.
Revised:  All those factors justified why Diallo was a good biology student and his interests in medical herbs.
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Original:  In 1953, Yaya Diallo went to French school at Zangasso, his mother’s native village.
Revised:  In 1953, Diallo went to French school at Zangasso, his mother’s native village.
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Original:  During the school, Yaya Diallo was sedentary.
Revised:  During school, Diallo was sedentary.
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Original:  You can not learn in books what you learn when you travel.” 1.5 Western Education Yaya Diallo started French school in 1953.
Revised:  You can not learn in books what you learn when you travel.” 1.5 Western education Yaya Diallo started French school in 1953.
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Original:  You can not learn in books what you learn when you travel.” 1.5 Western Education Yaya Diallo started French school in 1953.
Revised:  You can not learn in books what you learn when you travel.” 1.5 Western Education Diallo started French school in 1953.
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Original:  According to the prediction of villagers, Yaya Diallo could not stay in school for two years, “he is not even good enough to be black, how can he succeed in the white man’s school?” . Since he went to the classroom he was ranked among the 5 best students out of 51 in total.
Revised:  According to the prediction of villagers, Yaya Diallo could not stay in school for two years, “he is not even good enough to be black, how can he succeed in the white man’s school?” Since he went to the classroom he was ranked among the 5 best students out of 51 in total.
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Original:  According to the prediction of villagers, Yaya Diallo could not stay in school for two years, “he is not even good enough to be black, how can he succeed in the white man’s school?” . Since he went to the classroom he was ranked among the 5 best students out of 51 in total.
Revised:  According to the prediction of villagers, Yaya Diallo could not stay in school for two years, “he is not even good enough to be black, how can he succeed in the white man’s school?” . Since he went to the classroom he was ranked among the five best students out of 51 in total.
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Original:  The best thirty students would go to the Lycee Henri Terrassons de Fougeres at Bamako.
Revised:  The best 30 students would go to the Lycee Henri Terrassons de Fougeres at Bamako.
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Original:  That school became Lycee Askia Mohamed in 1962-1963 . In spite of all kinds of difficulties, Yaya Diallo was ranked among the top thirty students (Healing Drum  pp. 143–145).
Revised:  That school became Lycee Askia Mohamed in 1962-63 . In spite of all kinds of difficulties, Yaya Diallo was ranked among the top thirty students (Healing Drum pp. 143–145).
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Original:  That school became Lycee Askia Mohamed in 1962-1963 . In spite of all kinds of difficulties, Yaya Diallo was ranked among the top thirty students (Healing Drum  pp. 143–145).
Revised:  That school became Lycee Askia Mohamed in 1962-1963 . In spite of all kinds of difficulties, Yaya Diallo was ranked among the top thirty students (Healing Drum , pp. 143–145).
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Original:  He came to Montreal on Sept. 22, 1967  two weeks before the mid-term exams.
Revised:  He came to Montreal on September 22, 1967 two weeks before the mid-term exams.
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Original:  He came to Montreal on Sept. 22, 1967  two weeks before the mid-term exams.
Revised:  He came to Montreal on Sept. 22, 1967 , two weeks before the mid-term exams.
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Original:  From 1969-70 he was working full-time by night (4pm-2am) and school full-time (8am-3pm).
Revised:  From 1969 to 1970 he was working full-time by night (4pm-2am) and school full-time (8am-3pm).
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Original:  In Oct.1970 , he stopped because there was the October Revolution in Montreal.
Revised:  In October 1970 , he stopped because there was the October Revolution in Montreal.
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Original:  2 Brief Career as a Chemist May-Sept. 1973 After graduation he was hired by Dr. Robert Marchesseault, the Head of the Department of Chemistry, to work on a special project for Domtar Inc.
Revised:  2 Brief career as a chemist May-Sept. 1973 After graduation he was hired by Dr. Robert Marchesseault, the Head of the Department of Chemistry, to work on a special project for Domtar Inc.
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Original:  2 Brief Career as a Chemist May-Sept. 1973 After graduation he was hired by Dr. Robert Marchesseault, the Head of the Department of Chemistry, to work on a special project for Domtar Inc.
Revised:  2 Brief Career as a Chemist May-September 1973 After graduation he was hired by Dr. Robert Marchesseault, the Head of the Department of Chemistry, to work on a special project for Domtar Inc.
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Original:  Using Ziegler-Natta catalysts, Yaya Diallo was to determine how to make waterproof paper from rolls of paper in movement.
Revised:  Using Ziegler-Natta catalysts, Diallo was to determine how to make waterproof paper from rolls of paper in movement.
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Original:  Yaya Diallo put one piece of paper in water for one day and another for one week to find out if they absorbed water.
Revised:  Diallo put one piece of paper in water for one day and another for one week to find out if they absorbed water.
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Original:  To prove the utility of the project, Yaya Diallo had to determine the time of the paper in the solvent, the time in the products, and the time the paper needed to be dried.
Revised:  To prove the utility of the project, Diallo had to determine the time of the paper in the solvent, the time in the products, and the time the paper needed to be dried.
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Original:  The officers of immigration were outraged because Yaya Diallo’s case became very popular.
Revised:  The officers of immigration were outraged because Diallo’s case became very popular.
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Original:  On March 1974, he received an order to leave Canada or he would be deported in 2 days.
Revised:  On March 1974, he received an order to leave Canada or he would be deported in two days.
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Original:  He became an immigrant in 1974 and a Canadian citizen in 1983. 2.3 Second Short Career as a Chemist In 1975, Yaya was ready to go back home to Mali.
Revised:  He became an immigrant in 1974 and a Canadian citizen in 1983. 2.3 Second short career as a chemist In 1975, Yaya was ready to go back home to Mali.
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Original:  In the newspaper he saw a contest in which the winner would get a job at the Department of Geology at the University du Quebec at Montreal. he took a piece of paper, identified 9 mistakes out of 10 in the formulation of the problem and won the contest.
Revised:  In the newspaper he saw a contest in which the winner would get a job at the Department of Geology at the University du Quebec in Montreal. He took a piece of paper, identified 9 mistakes out of 10 in the formulation of the problem and won the contest.
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Original:  3 Musical Career Yaya Diallo said, “For my people, with its rich musical context, exposure to music begins in the wombs when pregnant mothers join in the community dance...when infants are then wrapped onto their mother’s backs with a cloth and taken into the dancing circle with everyone else.”
Revised:  3 Musical career Yaya Diallo said, “For my people, with its rich musical context, exposure to music begins in the wombs when pregnant mothers join in the community dance...when infants are then wrapped onto their mother’s backs with a cloth and taken into the dancing circle with everyone else.”
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Original:  This statement is quoted by Mickey Hart in his book , Planet Drum pp. 88.
Revised:  This statement is quoted by Mickey Hart in his book Planet Drum, pp. 88.
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Original:  3.1 Practice Time Listening is the most important tool for learning in oral traditions.
Revised:  3.1 Practice time Listening is the most important tool for learning in oral traditions.
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Original:  As a shepherd, Yaya Diallo was using his body, pieces of wood and stones as musical instruments.
Revised:  As a shepherd, Yaya Diallo was using his body, pieces of wood and stones as musicalt instruments.
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Original:  3.2 Musical Career in Montreal, Canada 1977-1978 Yaya Diallo and Alain Tagny created Cleba, meaning that the sun is shining for everyone, so white people were accepted in the group.
Revised:  3.2 Musical career in Montreal, Canada 1977-1978 Yaya Diallo and Alain Tagny created Cleba, meaning that the sun is shining for everyone, so white people were accepted in the group.
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Original:  3.2 Musical Career in Montreal, Canada 1977-1978 Yaya Diallo and Alain Tagny created Cleba, meaning that the sun is shining for everyone, so white people were accepted in the group.
Revised:  3.2 Musical Career in Montreal, Canada 1977-78 Yaya Diallo and Alain Tagny created Cleba, meaning that the sun is shining for everyone, so white people were accepted in the group.
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Original:  That music unit was successful and played for bg events like St. John Baptist Celebration on main stages.
Revised:  That music unit was successful and played for big events such as St. John Baptist Celebration on main stages.
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Original:  Oct. 1977- Feb. 1978 To survive, Yaya Diallo had money from unemployment for ten months.
Revised:  October 1977-February 1978 To survive, Yaya Diallo had money from unemployment for ten months.
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Original:  Oct. 1977- Feb. 1978 To survive, Yaya Diallo had money from unemployment for ten months.
Revised:  Oct. 1977- Feb. 1978 To survive, Diallo had money from unemployment for ten months.
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Original:  1978-1979 1979-1980 At the Centre Monchanin, now Intercultural Institute of Montreal, he started to teach African dance to a group of women.
Revised:  1978-79 1979-1980 At the Centre Monchanin, now Intercultural Institute of Montreal, he started to teach African dance to a group of women.
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Original:  1978-1979 1979-1980 At the Centre Monchanin, now Intercultural Institute of Montreal, he started to teach African dance to a group of women.
Revised:  1978-1979 1979-80 At the Centre Monchanin, now Intercultural Institute of Montreal, he started to teach African dance to a group of women.
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Original:  At the end of the project, Yaya Diallo was hired to work at the center in 1980.
Revised:  At the end of the project, Diallo was hired to work at the center in 1980.
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Original:  He worked part-time and became a staff member and Treasurer of the board from 1980-1987. 1980-1990 While he was working at the Center, he met a multi-billionaire, Madame Dominique de Menil from Houston, Texas.
Revised:  He worked part-time and became a staff member and Treasurer of the board from 1980 to 1987. 1980-1990 While he was working at the Center, he met a multi-billionaire, Madame Dominique de Menil from Houston, Texas.
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Original:  He worked part-time and became a staff member and Treasurer of the board from 1980-1987. 1980-1990 While he was working at the Center, he met a multi-billionaire, Madame Dominique de Menil from Houston, Texas.
Revised:  He worked part-time and became a staff member and Treasurer of the board from 1980-1987. 1980-90 While he was working at the Center, he met a multi-billionaire, Madame Dominique de Menil from Houston, Texas.
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Original:  When the journalist Zwelakhe Sisulu’s name was announced, Yaya Diallo played a beat for courage and motivation.
Revised:  When the journalist Zwelakhe Sisulu’s name was announced, Diallo played a beat for courage and motivation.
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Original:  Dec. 1981 In Houston, Warren Robbins was impressed by Yaya Diallo’s wisdom and invited him for some events in Washington D.C. Yaya Diallo met some leaders of the Black community (today called African Americans) especially the group of African Heritage. he performed at an Evening of Balafon music feature Yaya Diallo and Pascal Milogo at the Smithsonian Museum in Washington on Dec. 27th , 1981.
Revised:  December 1981 In Houston, Warren Robbins was impressed by Yaya Diallo’s wisdom and invited him for some events in Washington D.C. Yaya Diallo met some leaders of the Black community (today called African Americans) especially the group of African Heritage. he performed at an Evening of Balafon music feature Yaya Diallo and Pascal Milogo at the Smithsonian Museum in Washington on Dec. 27th , 1981.
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Original:  Dec. 1981 In Houston, Warren Robbins was impressed by Yaya Diallo’s wisdom and invited him for some events in Washington D.C. Yaya Diallo met some leaders of the Black community (today called African Americans) especially the group of African Heritage. he performed at an Evening of Balafon music feature Yaya Diallo and Pascal Milogo at the Smithsonian Museum in Washington on Dec. 27th , 1981.
Revised:  Dec. 1981 In Houston, Warren Robbins was impressed by Yaya Diallo’s wisdom and invited him for some events in Washington D.C. Diallo met some leaders of the Black community (today called African Americans) especially the group of African Heritage. he performed at an Evening of Balafon music feature Yaya Diallo and Pascal Milogo at the Smithsonian Museum in Washington on Dec. 27th , 1981.
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