wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  This is following the ongoing events in the financial world , including statements by several UK politicians, including the Prime Minister Gordon Brown.
Revised:  This is following the ongoing events in the financial world , including statements by several UK politicians, including Prime Minister Gordon Brown.
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Original:  By 1730 UTC, the Argentinean MERVAL index had fallen by almost six per cent to 906.160 points, while the Brazilian Bovespa , fell by 6.89\% (2,328.45 points) to a value of 31,490.04.
Revised:  By 17:30 UTC, the Argentinean MERVAL index had fallen by almost six per cent to 906.160 points, while the Brazilian Bovespa , fell by 6.89\% (2,328.45 points) to a value of 31,490.04.
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Original:  By 1730 UTC, the Argentinean MERVAL index had fallen by almost six per cent to 906.160 points, while the Brazilian Bovespa , fell by 6.89\% (2,328.45 points) to a value of 31,490.04.
Revised:  By 1730 UTC, the Argentinean MERVAL index had fallen by almost six per cent to 906.160 points, while the Brazilian Bovespa fell by 6.89\% (2,328.45 points) to a value of 31,490.04.
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Original:  "Confidence is shot to rippons .
Revised:  "Confidence is shot to ribbons .
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Original:  This is following the ongoing events in the financial world and related statements by several UK politicians, including Prime Minister Gordon Brown.
Revised:  This is following the ongoing events in the financial world and related statements by several United Kingdom politicians, including Prime Minister Gordon Brown.
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Original:  Stock markets worldwide fell dramatically today The British FTSE 100 index was one the indexes that today suffered from large falls.
Revised:  Stock markets worldwide fell dramatically today The British FTSE 100 index was one the indices that today suffered from large falls.
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Original:  Both major US indexes suffered from falls of over two per cent.
Revised:  Two of the major United States indices saw falls of over two per cent.
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Original: The ruling stated that some of the actions in the court were unconstitutional, in particular, the court stated that that inmates had a constitutional right to be given space for outdoor recreation and be kept at a reasonable level of health.
Revised: The ruling stated that some of the actions in the jail were unconstitutional, in particular, the court stated that that inmates had a constitutional right to be given space for outdoor recreation and be kept at a reasonable level of health.
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Original:  The controversial judge also stated that “I became Sheriff well over a decade after this case was first filed.
Revised:  The controversial sheriff also stated that “I became Sheriff well over a decade after this case was first filed.
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Original: The American Civil Liberties Union ( ALCU ) hailed the decision as a victory.
Revised: The American Civil Liberties Union ( ACLU ) hailed the decision as a victory.
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Original:  In contradiction to the ALCU 's claims, he stated that the changes ordered were only minor.
Revised:  In contradiction to the ACLU 's claims, he stated that the changes ordered were only minor.
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Original:  There is no claim of responsibility but it may be that Basque separatists are to blame, especially considering the Basque regional government had intended to hold a referendum today before being blocked from doing so last month by Spain's Constitutional Court
Revised:  There is no claim of responsibility but it may be that Basque separatists are to blame, especially considering the Basque regional government had intended to hold a referendum today before being blocked from doing so last month by the Constitutional Court of Spain
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Original:  There is no claim of responsibility but it may be that Basque separatists are to blame, especially considering the Basque regional government had intended to hold a referendum today before being blocked from doing so last month by the Constitutional Court of Spain
Revised:  No claim of responsibility but it may be that Basque separatists are to blame, especially considering the Basque regional government had intended to hold a referendum today before being blocked from doing so last month by the Constitutional Court of Spain
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Original:  There is no claim of responsibility but it may be that Basque separatists are to blame, especially considering the Basque regional government had intended to hold a referendum today before being blocked from doing so last month by the Constitutional Court of Spain
Revised:  There is no claim of responsibility has been made, but one report comments that the Basque regional government had intended to hold a referendum today before being blocked from doing so last month by the Constitutional Court of Spain
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Original: Michigan17Obama Minnesota10Obama Mississippi6McCain Missouri11McCain Montana3McCain Nebraska5McCain Nevada5Obama New Hampshire4Obama New Jersey15Obama New Mexico5Obama New York31Obama North Carolina15Obama North Dakota3McCain Ohio20Obama Oklahoma7Mccain Oregon7Obama Pennsylvania21Obama Rhode Island4Obama South Carolina8McCain South Dakota3McCain Tennessee11McCain Texas34McCain Utah5McCain Vermont3Obama Virginia13Obama Washington11Obama West Virginia5McCain Wisconsin10Obama Wyoming3McCai 
Revised: Michigan17Obama Minnesota10Obama Mississippi6McCain Missouri11McCain Montana3McCain Nebraska5McCain Nevada5Obama New Hampshire4Obama New Jersey15Obama New Mexico5Obama New York31Obama North Carolina15Obama North Dakota3McCain Ohio20Obama Oklahoma7Mccain Oregon7Obama Pennsylvania21Obama Rhode Island4Obama South Carolina8McCain South Dakota3McCain Tennessee11McCain Texas34McCain Utah5McCain Vermont3Obama Virginia13Obama Washington11Obama West Virginia5McCain Wisconsin10Obama Wyoming3McCain 
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Original: Michigan17Obama Minnesota10Obama Mississippi6McCain Missouri11McCain Montana3McCain Nebraska5McCain Nevada5Obama New Hampshire4Obama New Jersey15Obama New Mexico5Obama New York31Obama North Carolina15Obama North Dakota3McCain Ohio20Obama Oklahoma7Mccain Oregon7Obama Pennsylvania21Obama Rhode Island4Obama South Carolina8McCain South Dakota3McCain Tennessee11McCain Texas34McCain Utah5McCain Vermont3Obama Virginia13Obama Washington11Obama West Virginia5McCain Wisconsin10Obama Wyoming3McCai 
Revised: Michigan17Obama Minnesota10Obama Mississippi6McCain Missouri11McCain Montana3McCain Nebraska5McCain Nevada5Obama New Hampshire4Obama New Jersey15Obama New Mexico5Obama New York31Obama North Carolina15Obama North Dakota3McCain Ohio20Obama Oklahoma7Mccain Oregon7Obama Pennsylvania21Obama Rhode Island4Obama South Carolina8McCain South Dakota3McCain Tennessee11McCain Texas34McCain Utah5McCain Vermont3Obama Virginia13Obama Washington11Obama West Virginia5McCain Wisconsin10Obama Wyoming3McCai Note
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Original: Michigan17Obama Minnesota10Obama Mississippi6McCain Missouri11McCain Montana3McCain Nebraska5McCain Nevada5Obama New Hampshire4Obama New Jersey15Obama New Mexico5Obama New York31Obama North Carolina15Obama North Dakota3McCain Ohio20Obama Oklahoma7Mccain Oregon7Obama Pennsylvania21Obama Rhode Island4Obama South Carolina8McCain South Dakota3McCain Tennessee11McCain Texas34McCain Utah5McCain Vermont3Obama Virginia13Obama Washington11Obama West Virginia5McCain Wisconsin10Obama Wyoming3McCai
Revised: Michigan17Obama Minnesota10Obama Mississippi6McCain Missouri11Too close Montana3McCain Nebraska5McCain Nevada5Obama New Hampshire4Obama New Jersey15Obama New Mexico5Obama New York31Obama North Carolina15Obama North Dakota3McCain Ohio20Obama Oklahoma7Mccain Oregon7Obama Pennsylvania21Obama Rhode Island4Obama South Carolina8McCain South Dakota3McCain Tennessee11McCain Texas34McCain Utah5McCain Vermont3Obama Virginia13Obama Washington11Obama West Virginia5McCain Wisconsin10Obama Wyoming3McCai
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Original:  Djibouti has said that unless the UN intervenes there will be war  
Revised:  Djibouti has said that unless the UN intervenes there will be war . 
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Original:  The unmarked border remains disputed, and the nations have built up troops on each side of the border, keeping the situation tense   
Revised:  The unmarked border remains disputed, and the nations have built up troops on each side of the border, keeping the situation tense . 
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Original:  He claimed his country desired "the cultivation of good neighbourly relations with Djibouti," and said that "Contrary to the claims made, Eritrea has not taken any land that belongs to Djibouti and it does not have any territorial ambitions.   
Revised:  He claimed his country desired "the cultivation of good neighbourly relations with Djibouti," and said that "Contrary to the claims made, Eritrea has not taken any land that belongs to Djibouti and it does not have any territorial ambitions. " 
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Original:  Djibouti's President Omah Guelleh told the UN security council "Continued inaction in whatever form not only will encourage but will benefit Eritrea's attitude.
Revised:  Djibouti's President Omar Guelleh told the UN security council "Continued inaction in whatever form not only will encourage but will benefit Eritrea's attitude.
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Original:  So  refusal of Shas, which has 12 MKs, to join, comes as a major blow to her attempts.
Revised:  So the refusal of Shas, which has 12 MKs, to join, comes as a major blow to her attempts.
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Original:  If Ms. Livni does fail in preparing the alliance, the decision will be down to President Peres whether to  try to create a coalition himself or to call an election.
Revised:  If Ms. Livni does fail in preparing the alliance, the decision will be down to President Peres whether to try to create a coalition , or to call an election.
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Original:  "I believe there were up to about 2,000 people who entered this race and I advised the organizers not to go ahead with the event."
Revised:  "I believe there were up to about two thousand people who entered this race and I advised the organizers not to go ahead with the event."
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Original: 12 people have suffered from hypothermia, and one of them has been taken to the nearby Cumberland Infirmary Hospital for treatment .
Revised: 12 people have suffered from hypothermia, and one of them has been taken to the nearby Cumberland Infirmary Hospital for treatment 
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Original:  The incident occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley
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Original: A fell running event, the Original Mountain Marathon, has been abandoned under appalling weather conditions, which left  number of competitors becoming stranded.
Revised: A fell running event, the Original Mountain Marathon, has been abandoned under appalling weather conditions, which left a number of competitors becoming stranded.
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Original: A fell running event, the Original Mountain Marathon, has been abandoned under appalling weather conditions, which left  number of competitors becoming stranded.
Revised: A fell running event, the Original Mountain Marathon, has been abandoned under appalling weather conditions, which left number of competitors stranded.
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Original:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley  region of the in the UK's Lake District  left hundreds of runners stranded due to floods.
Revised:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley (a region of the in the UK's Lake District left hundreds of runners stranded due to floods.
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Original:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley  region of the in the UK's Lake District  left hundreds of runners stranded due to floods.
Revised:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley region of the UK's Lake District left hundreds of runners stranded due to floods.
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Original:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley  region of the in the UK's Lake District  left hundreds of runners stranded due to floods.
Revised:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley region of the in the UK's Lake District ) left hundreds of runners stranded due to floods.
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Original:  One person has been taken to Cumberland Infirmary Hospital for treatment The runners were taking part in the Original Mountain Marathon (OMM), until the flooding and heavy rain forced them to stop.
Revised:  One person has been taken to Cumberland Infirmary Hospital for treatment The runners were taking part in the Original Mountain Marathon (OMM), until flooding and heavy rain forced them to stop.
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Original: The   disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley (a region of the UK's Lake District) left hundreds of runners stranded due to floods .
Revised: The The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley (a region of the UK's Lake District) left hundreds of runners stranded due to floods .
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Original: The   disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley (a region of the UK's Lake District) left hundreds of runners stranded due to floods .
Revised: The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley (a region of the UK's Lake District) left hundreds of runners stranded due to flooding .
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Original:  Around three hundred people have been forced to take shelter at the nearby Honister Slate Mine.
Revised:  Around three hundred people were forced to take shelter at the nearby Honister Slate Mine.
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Original:  The Indian air industry was recently hit by rapidly increasing fuel costs  
Revised:  The Indian air industry was recently hit by rapidly increasing fuel costs . 
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Original:  The total cost of fuel has risen from Rs 696 crore last year to Rs 1690 crore, and income rose from Rs 2,254 crore to Rs 3,258 crore in the same period  
Revised:  The total cost of fuel has risen from Rs 696 crore last year to Rs 1690 crore, and income rose from Rs 2,254 crore to Rs 3,258 crore in the same period . 
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Original:  There was  expenditure of 143\% on fuel costs to wipe out a 45\% income increase.
Revised:  There was an increase in expenditure of 143\% on fuel costs to wipe out a 45\% income increase.
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Original:  So far no charges have been filed against anyone for the crimes  
Revised:  So far no charges have been filed against anyone for the crimes . 
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Original:  The FBI was called in after authorities suspected King might have been taken over state lines.
Revised:  The FBI was called in because authorities suspected King might have been taken over state lines.
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Original:  He don 't deserve this.
Revised:  He doesn 't deserve this.
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Original:  Air Force officials described it as a promotion  
Revised:  Air Force officials described it as a promotion . 
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Original: On 2 November 2008 Carol Rosenberg, writing in the Miami Herald, reported that Hartmann had filed a request to retire from the Air Force on 17 February 2008.
Revised: On November 2, 2008 Carol Rosenberg, writing in the Miami Herald, reported that Hartmann had filed a request to retire from the Air Force on 17 February 2008.
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Original:  Hartmann's boss at the Pentagon, William J. Haynes, had announced his resignation in February
Revised:  Hartmann's superior at the Pentagon, William J. Haynes, had announced his resignation in February
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Original: The location of the stranded runners 1700 runners running in the Original Mountain Marathon a w: fell running event, are still unaccounted for the day after they were stranded by flooding.
Revised: The location of the stranded runners 1700 runners running in the Original Mountain Marathon a fell running event, are still unaccounted for the day after they were stranded by flooding.
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Original:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the w: Borrowdale Valley (a region of the w: UK's w: Lake District) , and the people found have sought refuge at local buildings and businesses.
Revised:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley (a region of the w: UK's w: Lake District) , and the people found have sought refuge at local buildings and businesses.
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Original:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the w: Borrowdale Valley (a region of the w: UK's w: Lake District) , and the people found have sought refuge at local buildings and businesses.
Revised:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the w: Borrowdale Valley (a region of the UK's w: Lake District) , and the people found have sought refuge at local buildings and businesses.
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Original:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the w: Borrowdale Valley (a region of the w: UK's w: Lake District) , and the people found have sought refuge at local buildings and businesses.
Revised:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the w: Borrowdale Valley (a region of the w: UK's Lake District) , and the people found have sought refuge at local buildings and businesses.
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Original:  Three hundred of the people found have sheltered in the nearly Honister Slate Mine.
Revised:  Three hundred of the people found have sheltered in the nearby Honister Slate Mine.
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Original: Approximately 2000 people entered the race, and rescue teams have resumed there search took search for the missing.
Revised: Approximately 2000 people entered the race, and rescue teams have resumed their search for the missing.
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Original: The location of the stranded runners 1700 runners running in the Original Mountain Marathon , a fell running event   , are still unaccounted for the day after they were stranded by flooding.
Revised: The location of the stranded runners All runners participating in the Original Mountain Marathon , a fell running event , are still unaccounted for the day after they were stranded by flooding.
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Original: The location of the stranded runners 1700 runners running in the Original Mountain Marathon , a fell running event   , are still unaccounted for the day after they were stranded by flooding.
Revised: The location of the stranded runners 1700 runners running in the Original Mountain Marathon , a fell running event , 
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Original:  "I believe there were up to about two thousand people who entered this race and I advised the organizers not to go ahead with the event." "The mountain rescue teams are still trying to account for everyone," added Weir.
Revised:  "I advised the organizers not to go ahead with the event." "The mountain rescue teams are still trying to account for everyone," added Weir.
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Original:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley (a region of the UK's Lake District) , and the people found have sought refuge at local buildings and businesses.
Revised:  The disruption of the event that occurred at the top of one of the highest mountains in the Borrowdale Valley (a region of the UK's Lake District) , and the people have sought refuge at local buildings and businesses.
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Original:  Among the dead were a man, four of his sons, and two "workers", though it is not known what their jobs were .
Revised:  Among the dead were a man, four of his sons, and two farm workers .
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Original:  At least 14  were injured.
Revised:  At least 14 others were injured.
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Original:  BBC also states that there are unconfirmed reports that the strike was carried out by the United States military.
Revised:  The Syrian government state the strike was carried out by the United States military.
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Original:  BBC also states that there are unconfirmed reports that the strike was carried out by the United States military.
Revised:  BBC also states that there are unconfirmed reports that the strike was carried out by the U.S. military.
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Original:  Witnesses say that the helicopters appeared to be American and the attack involved at least four helicopters, two of which landed.
Revised:  Witnesses say that the helicopters appeared to be American and involved at least four helicopters, two of which landed.
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Original:  Further witness reports say that at least eight American soldiers proceeded to get off the helicopter.
Revised:  Further witness reports say that at least eight American soldiers proceeded to get off the helicopters.
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Original: According to the Syrian government, United States military helicopters attacked a farm on the Syrian-Iraq border.
Revised: According to the Syrian government, United States military helicopters attacked a farm on the Syria-Iraq border.
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Original: On report from Trend News says that Lebanese officials confirm that the raid was carried out by U.S. troops and that they were targeting alleged terrorists preparing to infiltrate Iraq.
Revised: One report from Trend News says that Lebanese officials confirm that the raid was carried out by U.S. troops and that they were targeting alleged terrorists preparing to infiltrate Iraq.
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Original:  If the U.S. is found to have carried out the attack, it would be the first time any such attack was carried out inside Syria by U.S. forces
Revised:  If the U.S. carried out the attack, it would be the first time any such attack was carried out inside Syria by U.S. forces
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Original: 200px|Some online communities and forums push teenagers into computer crime.
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Original:  "They do not even know enough to get a simple phishing or attack tool right," said Kevin Hogan, a senior manager  Symantec Security Response.
Revised:  "They do not even know enough to get a simple phishing or attack tool right," said Kevin Hogan, a senior manager of Symantec Security Response.
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Original:  They commonly sign on with the same alias used to crack a site, run a phishing attack or write a web exploit  .
Revised:  They commonly sign on with the same alias used to crack a site, run a phishing attack , write a web exploit .
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Original:  Many nuisance programs are written by teenagers to exploit users of social networking sites, opines Chris Boyd, director of malware research at FaceTime Security.
Revised:  Many nuisance programs are written by teenagers to exploit users of social networking sites, says Chris Boyd, director of malware research at FaceTime Security.
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Original: Swapping malicious programs, knowledge, stolen data, exploits and virus code is very popular with teenagers exposed to the world of computer crime.
Revised: Swapping malicious programs, knowledge, stolen data, exploits and virus code are very popular with teenagers exposed to the world of computer crime.
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Original:  Teenagers ' desire to win recognition for their exploits makes them post revealing videos in sites such as YouTube.
Revised:  Teenagers desire to win recognition for their exploits makes them post revealing videos in sites such as YouTube.
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