wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The Pentagon analysis was released the same day that Yang Baohua, head of the Academy of Space Technology, announced that testing of a new EVA spacesuit and airlock had been successfully completed.
Revised:  analysis was released the same day that Yang Baohua, head of the Academy of Space Technology, announced that testing of a new EVA spacesuit and airlock had been successfully completed.
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Original:  The two units are being developed for China's first intended spacewalk in six months as part of Shenzhou 7.
Revised:  The two units are being developed for China's first intended spacewalk as part of Shenzhou 7.
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Original:  The US Pentagon submitted a report to Congress on Monday, detailing the Chinese Space Agency's focus on developing means for "space warfare".
Revised:  The United States Pentagon submitted a report to Congress on Monday, detailing the Chinese Space Agency's focus on developing means for "space warfare".
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Original:  She was born in Athens and became a major actor in the 1960s  & 
Revised:  She was born in Athens and became a major actor in the 1960s . & 
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Original: Ella Nathanail Ella Nathanail , Greek actress died yesterday from lung cancer at the age of 67.
Revised: Ella Nathanail Ella Nathanael , Greek actress died yesterday from lung cancer at the age of 67.
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Original: The following deaths were reported yesterday - Ernest Gary Gygax Ernest Gary Gygax, co-creator of Dungeons & Dragons, died in his Lake Geneva, Wisconsin home yesterday at the age of 69 due to heart problems.
Revised: The following deaths were reported yesterday . Ernest Gary Gygax Ernest Gary Gygax, co-creator of Dungeons & Dragons, died in his Lake Geneva, Wisconsin home yesterday at the age of 69 due to heart problems.
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Original:  Rosenman's death at the age of 83 was caused by a heart attack  
Revised:  Rosenman's death at the age of 83 was caused by a heart attack . 
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Original:  An unnamed male student has committed suicide by throwing himself out of a tenth floor window in Middlesbrough, England.
Revised:  An unnamed male student has fallen to his death from a tenth floor window in Middlesbrough, England.
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Original:  We will give more information as soon as we are able   .
Revised:  We will give more information as soon as we are able ." .
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Original: The 24-year-old, who is believed to be an engineering student from the Ivory Coast, threw himself out of an open window in Middlesbrough Tower, the main building of the University of Teesside.
Revised: The 24-year-old, who is believed to be an engineering student from Ivory Coast, threw himself out of an open window in Middlesbrough Tower, the main building of the University of Teesside.
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Original: University Tower at the University of Teesside An unnamed male student has fallen to his death from a tenth floor window in Middlesbrough, England.
Revised: University Tower at the University of Teesside A student has fallen to his death from a tenth floor window in Middlesbrough, England.
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Original: The 24-year-old , who is believed to be an engineering student from West Africa, threw himself out of an open window in Middlesbrough Tower, the main building of the University of Teesside.
Revised: The 24-year-old threw himself out of an open window in Middlesbrough Tower, the main building of the University of Teesside.
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Original:  250px|Picture taken by a supporter of Anonymous of the last bunch of protesters at the end of the day.
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Original:  Since Scientology was devoting the afternoon to human rights, we asked for Scientology's opinion about human rights controversies in the United States (such as the Guantanamo Bay detainees). the Scientologist told Wikinews that the Church was a religious movement and avoided taking general political stances.
Revised:  Since Scientology was devoting the afternoon to human rights, we asked for Scientology's opinion about human rights controversies in the United States (such as the Guantanamo Bay detainees). The Scientologist told Wikinews that the Church was a religious movement and avoided taking general political stances.
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Original: Starting off from a meeting point in Brussels Central Station, the anonymous protesters proceeded on foot to arrive at their licensed protest point outside the Brussels Stock Exchange around 12:30 local time.
Revised: Starting off from a meeting point at the Brussels Central Station, the anonymous protesters proceeded on foot to arrive at their licensed protest point outside the Brussels Stock Exchange around 12:30 local time.
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Original:  Per advice from the police  cake was not on offer.
Revised:  Per advice from the police , cake was not on offer.
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Original:  In contrast to other countries, Belgium has laws prohibiting protesters to cover their faces, leaving the protesters to wear sunglasses and shawls.
Revised:  Unlike other countries, Belgium has laws prohibiting protesters to cover their faces, leaving the protesters to wear sunglasses and shawls.
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Original:  The protest couldn't take place in front of Scientology's headquarters because an E.U. summit was scheduled to continue until today.
Revised:  The protest could not take place in front of Scientology's headquarters because an E.U. summit was scheduled to continue until today.
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Original:  Scientology itself was however allowed to be active outside their headquarters, for what they said was an ' open door day '.
Revised:  Scientology members were allowed to be active outside their headquarters, for what they said was an ' open door day '.
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Original:  Scientology itself was however allowed to be active outside their headquarters, for what they said was an ' open door day '.
Revised:  Scientology itself was however allowed to be active outside their headquarters, for their " open door day '.
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Original:  There were no special activities inside their building  , just volunteers handing out flyers to perhaps a dozen passers-by.
Revised:  There were no special activities inside their building was observed , just volunteers handing out flyers to perhaps a dozen passers-by.
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Original:  The press release for this supposed open door day was completely devoted to Anonymous: Wikinews spoke to a Scientology representative in the European headquarters, which are located in the political heart of Brussels;
Revised:  The press release for this open door day was completely devoted to Anonymous: Wikinews spoke to a Scientology representative in the European headquarters, which are located in the political heart of Brussels;
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Original:  The press release for this supposed open door day was completely devoted to Anonymous: Wikinews spoke to a Scientology representative in the European headquarters, which are located in the political heart of Brussels;
Revised:  The press release for this supposed open door day was devoted to Anonymous: Wikinews spoke to a Scientology representative in the European headquarters, which are located in the political heart of Brussels;
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Original:  The Scientologist told Wikinews that the Church was a religious movement and avoided taking general political stances.
Revised:  The representative told Wikinews that the Church was a religious movement and avoided taking general political stances.
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Original:  The Scientologist told Wikinews that the Church was a religious movement and avoided taking general political stances.
Revised:  The Scientologist told Wikinews that the Church is a religious movement and avoided taking general political stances.
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Original:  The Scientologist told Wikinews that the Church was a religious movement and avoided taking general political stances.
Revised:  The Scientologist told Wikinews that the Church was a religious movement and avoids taking general political stances.
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Original:  The representative was also quite confident about a pending lawsuit from the Belgian federal prosecutor.
Revised:  The representative was also confident about the outcome of a pending lawsuit from the Belgian federal prosecutor.
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Original:  After an investigation of 8 years , the Belgian justice said  the local and European chapter and individual members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling of members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
Revised:  After an eigth-year investigation , the Belgian justice said the local and European chapter and individual members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling of members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
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Original:  After an investigation of 8 years , the Belgian justice said  the local and European chapter and individual members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling of members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
Revised:  After an investigation of 8 years , the Belgian justice said that the local and European chapter and individual members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling of members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
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Original:  After an investigation of 8 years , the Belgian justice said  the local and European chapter and individual members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling of members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
Revised:  After an investigation of 8 years , the Belgian justice said the local and European chapters, as well as, members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling of members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
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Original:  After an investigation of 8 years , the Belgian justice said  the local and European chapter and individual members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling of members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
Revised:  After an investigation of 8 years , the Belgian justice said the local and European chapter and individual members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
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Original:  "The file is empty," said the Scientologist, who ascertained that the inquiry had been so lengthy because the state couldn't prove any wrongdoings by the Church.
Revised:  "The file is empty," said the Scientology representative, who asserted that the inquiry had been so lengthy because the state couldn't prove any wrongdoings by the Church.
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Original:  "The file is empty," said the Scientologist, who ascertained that the inquiry had been so lengthy because the state couldn't prove any wrongdoings by the Church.
Revised:  "The file is empty," said the Scientologist, who ascertained that the inquiry had been so lengthy because the state could not prove any wrongdoings by the Church.
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Original:  As opposed to the U.S., the man said Scientology is not seeking official recognition in Belgium, which recognises only 6 religions.
Revised:  He said that unlike in the US, Scientology is not seeking official recognition in Belgium, which recognises only 6 religions.
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Original:  As opposed to the U.S., the man said Scientology is not seeking official recognition in Belgium, which recognises only 6 religions.
Revised:  As opposed to the U.S., the man said Scientology is not seeking official recognition in Belgium, which recognises only six religions.
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Original:  He  claimed that there were more than 1,000 Scientologists in Belgium.
Revised:  He also claimed that there were more than 1,000 Scientologists in Belgium.
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Original:  "Today we are on the streets again, our numbers ever-increasing - and we will come again in April - in May- in June - and July."— Anonymous global speech Anonymous distributed flyers and informed passers-by about Scientology.
Revised:  "Today we are on the streets again, our numbers ever-increasing — and we will come again in April - in May- in June - and July."— Anonymous global speech Anonymous distributed flyers and informed passers-by about Scientology.
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Original:  "Today we are on the streets again, our numbers ever-increasing - and we will come again in April - in May- in June - and July."— Anonymous global speech Anonymous distributed flyers and informed passers-by about Scientology.
Revised:  "Today we are on the streets again, our numbers ever-increasing - and we will come again in April —in May—in June and July."— Anonymous global speech Anonymous distributed flyers and informed passers-by about Scientology.
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Original:  In a speech, they called for a dialogue with Scientology members, and said they were concerned for the parishioner' s well-being: Belgian media were in attendance again with one film crew from RTBF interviewing several of the protesters and catching their banners on tape.
Revised:  In a speech, they called for a dialogue with Scientology members, and said they were concerned for the parishioners' well-being: Belgian media were in attendance again with one film crew from RTBF interviewing several of the protesters and catching their banners on tape.
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Original:  In a speech, they called for a dialogue with Scientology members, and said they were concerned for the parishioner' s well-being: Belgian media were in attendance again with one film crew from RTBF interviewing several of the protesters and catching their banners on tape.
Revised:  In a speech, they called for a dialogue with Scientology members, and said they were concerned for the parishioner' s well-being: Belgian media were in attendance with a film crew from RTBF interviewing several of the protesters and catching their banners on tape.
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Original:  In a speech, they called for a dialogue with Scientology members, and said they were concerned for the parishioner' s well-being: Belgian media were in attendance again with one film crew from RTBF interviewing several of the protesters and catching their banners on tape.
Revised:  In a speech, they called for a dialogue with Scientology members, and said they were concerned for the parishioner' s well-being: Belgian media were in attendance again with one film crew from RTBF interviewing several of the protesters and capturing their banners on tape.
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Original:  The slogans were mostly in English, ranging from "Religion is free, Scientology isn't" to "One billion years of servitude = super powers" - the latter a reference to the contracts that Scientologists sign when they become involved with the church's Sea Org.
Revised:  The slogans were mostly in English, ranging from "Religion is free, Scientology isn't" to "One billion years of servitude = super powers" — the latter a reference to the contracts that Scientologists sign when they become involved with the church's Sea Org.
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Original:  After an eigth-year investigation, the Belgian justice said that the local and European chapters, as well as, members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
Revised:  After an eighth-year investigation, the Belgian justice said that the local and European chapters, as well as, members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
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Original:  After an eighth-year investigation, the Belgian justice said that the local and European chapters, as well as, members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
Revised:  After an eight-year investigation, the Belgian justice said that the local and European chapters, as well as, members would be accused of blackmailing, swindling members, breaking trade and privacy laws, unlawfully practising medicine, and forming a criminal organisation.
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Original:  The protesters walked through the middle of the road, contrary to guidelines stated for the 10 Febraury protest.
Revised:  The protesters walked through the middle of the road, contrary to guidelines stated for the 10 February protest.
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Original:  Although the water level will only rise a few feet after the flood, officials are hoping it will be enough to restore  sandbars downstream.
Revised:  Although the water level will only rise a few feet after the flood, officials are hoping it will be enough to restore eroded sandbars downstream.
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Original:  "It's being manipulated to be a 'one and done,' even though we know that doesn't work.   
Revised:  "It's being manipulated to be a 'one and done,' even though we know that doesn't work. " 
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Original:  They assert that the floods must occur regularly is any real change is to be expected, and  accuse the government of conducting the experiment for show.
Revised:  They assert that the floods must occur regularly if any real change is to be expected, and accuse the government of conducting the experiment for show.
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Original:  They assert that the floods must occur regularly is any real change is to be expected, and  accuse the government of conducting the experiment for show.
Revised:  They assert that the floods must occur regularly is any real change is to be expected, and they accuse the government of conducting the experiment for show.
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Original:  The U.S. Geological Survey acknowledged that the timing was partly designed  to maximize electricity production during peak demand  
Revised:  The U.S. Geological Survey acknowledged that the timing was partly designed in order to maximize electricity production during peak demand 
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Original:  The U.S. Geological Survey acknowledged that the timing was partly designed  to maximize electricity production during peak demand  
Revised:  The U.S. Geological Survey acknowledged that the timing was partly designed to maximize electricity production during peak demand . 
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Original: The water was released from two pipes in the controversial Glen Canyon Dam, which blocks the Colorado River and creates the artificial reservoir Lake Powell.
Revised: The water was released from two pipes in the Glen Canyon Dam, which blocks the Colorado River and creates the artificial reservoir Lake Powell.
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Original: Image:Gila cypha.jpg|Example of a humpback chub After the dam was built in 1963, the seasonal floods that would spread sediment throughout the river were halted.
Revised:  After the dam was built in 1963, the seasonal floods that would spread sediment throughout the river were halted.
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Original:  He never forgot the value of grassroots football so we feel this is an appropriate and fitting tribute to a man who was passionate about the game and loved the city, the Blades and the Owls.   
Revised:  He never forgot the value of grassroots football so we feel this is an appropriate and fitting tribute to a man who was passionate about the game and loved the city, the Blades and the Owls. " 
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Original:  In his lie he has played with many musicians including Luka Bloom, Dónal Lunny, Mary Coughlan and Christy Moore
Revised:  In his life he has played with many musicians including Luka Bloom, Dónal Lunny, Mary Coughlan and Christy Moore
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Original: HM Coastguard helicopter "India Juliet" British coast guards have walked out for the first time today , in a strike over low pay.
Revised: HM Coastguard helicopter "India Juliet" British coast guards have walked out for the first time today in a strike over low pay.
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Original:  The strike, which began at 7 am (UTC) will affect 19 regional call centres which handle emergency calls and maydays.
Revised:  The strike, which began at 7 a.m. (UTC) will affect 19 regional call centres which handle emergency calls and maydays.
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Original:  The Public and Commercial Services Union said that 700 memebers had walked out over pay conditions, mainly due to the low wage increases in past years and the £12,000 salary, which is below that of other emergency services  .
Revised:  The Public and Commercial Services Union said that 700 members had walked out over pay conditions, mainly due to the low wage increases in past years and the £12,000 salary, which is below that of other emergency services .
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Original:  The Public and Commercial Services Union said that 700 memebers had walked out over pay conditions, mainly due to the low wage increases in past years and the £12,000 salary, which is below that of other emergency services  .
Revised:  The Public and Commercial Services Union said that 700 memebers had walked out over pay conditions, citing the £12,000 salary, which is below that of other emergency services .
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Original:  The strike, which began at 7 a.m. (UTC ) will affect 19 regional call centres which handle emergency calls and maydays.
Revised:  The strike, which began at 7 a.m. UTC will affect 19 regional call centres which handle emergency calls and maydays.
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Original: On April 8, 2005, police picked up a man wandering the streets of Sheerness, United Kingdom soaking wet, as if having been in the sea, wearing a formal black suit and white shirt with all labels removed  .
Revised: On April 8, 2005, police picked up a man wandering the streets of Sheerness, United Kingdom . The man was wearing a formal black suit and white shirt with all labels removed .
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Original:  Seeing the picture of the piano, the medical staff at the Medway Maritime Hospital where he was admitted showed him the piano in the hospital chapel , whereupon to their amazement he sat at it and played classical music for several hours.
Revised:  Seeing the picture of the piano, the medical staff at the Medway Maritime Hospital where he was admitted showed him the piano in the hospital chapel . To their amazement he sat at it and played classical music for several hours.
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Original:  Seeing the picture of the piano, the medical staff at the Medway Maritime Hospital where he was admitted showed him the piano in the hospital chapel , whereupon to their amazement he sat at it and played classical music for several hours.
Revised:  Seeing the picture of the piano, the medical staff at the Medway Maritime Hospital where he was admitted showed him the piano in the hospital chapel , whereupon to their amazement he sat at the instrument and played classical music for several hours.
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Original:  The man also had pointed to a flag of Sweden when shown an atlas, initially leading the hospital staff to believe he was from Sweden , although to date this lead has not panned out.
Revised:  The man also pointed to a flag of Sweden when shown an atlas, initially leading the hospital staff to believe he was from Sweden , although to date this lead has not panned out.
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Original:  The man also had pointed to a flag of Sweden when shown an atlas, initially leading the hospital staff to believe he was from Sweden , although to date this lead has not panned out.
Revised:  The man also had pointed to a flag of Sweden when shown an atlas, initially leading the hospital staff to believe he was from Sweden . To date this lead has not panned out.
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