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Original:  According to China Daily, there are three more private airlines in process Shanghai-based Spring International Airlines, the Chengdu-based Eagle Airlines and Huaxia Airlines in Gansu Province
Revised:  According to China Daily, there are three more private airlines will exist: Shanghai-based Spring International Airlines, the Chengdu-based Eagle Airlines and Huaxia Airlines in Gansu Province
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Original:  According to China Daily, there are three more private airlines in process Shanghai-based Spring International Airlines, the Chengdu-based Eagle Airlines and Huaxia Airlines in Gansu Province
Revised:  According to China Daily, there are three more private airlines in process Shanghai-based Spring International Airlines, the Chengdu-based Eagle Airlines , and Gansu Province-based Huaxia Airlines
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Original: The launch, which was schduled to be the third Shuttle launch this year, was to have occured at 02:35 GMT, however it has now been rescheduled.
Revised: The launch, which was scheduled to be the third Shuttle launch this year, was to have occured at 02:35 GMT, however it has now been rescheduled.
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Original: The launch, which was schduled to be the third Shuttle launch this year, was to have occured at 02:35 GMT, however it has now been rescheduled.
Revised: The launch, which was schduled to be the third Shuttle launch this year, was to have occurred at 02:35 GMT, however it has now been rescheduled.
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Original:  The next possible launch can occur at the same time on 9 December .
Revised:  The next possible launch can occur at the same time on December 9.
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Original:  The scrub occurred during an unscheduled hold in the countdown, 5 minutes before the launch was to have occured .
Revised:  The scrub occurred during an unscheduled hold in the countdown, 5 minutes before the launch was to have occurred .
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Original:  The launch, which was scheduled to be the third Shuttle launch this year, was to have occurred at 02:35 GMT , however it has now been rescheduled.
Revised:  The launch, which was scheduled to be the third Shuttle launch this year, was to have occurred at 02:35 GMT at the Kennedy Space Center, Florida, however it has now been rescheduled.
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Original:  The Space Shuttle's duration is 12 days
Revised:  The mission duration is 12 days
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Original: London, Shanghai – The BBC's political debate show Question Time was aired yesterday with a special edition from Shanghai  .
Revised: London, Shanghai – The BBC's political debate show Question Time aired a special edition from Shanghai .
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Original:  The show was broadcasted on BBC One and BBC World , however it wasn't shown in China, as  condition of the programme  .
Revised:  The show was broadcasted on BBC One and BBC World ; however, it wasn't shown in China, as condition of the programme .
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Original:  The show was broadcasted on BBC One and BBC World , however it wasn't shown in China, as  condition of the programme  .
Revised:  The show was broadcasted on BBC One and BBC World , however it wasn't shown in China, as a condition of the programme .
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Original:  The question were over the next chief-executive of Hong Kong, the new law about Taiwan, the whether China 's is having a growing about of spoilt children, the growing human rights question, a whether China will economically overtake America in 20 years time.
Revised:  The questions concerned, among other things, the next chief-executive of Hong Kong, the new law about Taiwan, the whether China 's is having a growing about of spoilt children, the growing human rights question, a whether China will economically overtake America in 20 years time.
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Original:  The question were over the next chief-executive of Hong Kong, the new law about Taiwan, the whether China 's is having a growing about of spoilt children, the growing human rights question, a whether China will economically overtake America in 20 years time.
Revised:  The question were over the next chief-executive of Hong Kong, China's attitudes toward Taiwan, whether China has growing problems concerning spoilt children, the growing human rights question, a whether China will economically overtake America in 20 years time.
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Original:  The question were over the next chief-executive of Hong Kong, the new law about Taiwan, the whether China 's is having a growing about of spoilt children, the growing human rights question, a whether China will economically overtake America in 20 years time.
Revised:  The question were over the next chief-executive of Hong Kong, the new law about Taiwan, the whether China 's is having a growing about of spoilt children, the growing human rights question, and whether China will economically overtake America in 20 years time.
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Original:  Many member of the audience liked the show at hoped a slimier show will broadcast in China, in a few years time  .
Revised:  Many members of the audience liked the show at hoped a slimier show will broadcast in China, in a few years time .
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Original:  Many member of the audience liked the show at hoped a slimier show will broadcast in China, in a few years time  .
Revised:  Many member of the audience liked the show and hoped a similar show will be broadcast in China, in a few years time .
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Original:  The panel contained the Chinese politician Liu Jianchao,who is the Chinese foreign ministry spokesman and Long Yongtu who is General Secretary for the Boao Forum for Asia, together with Chris Patten, the last Governor of Hong Kong, Isobel Hilton, a writer who has a large knowledge of China%DIFDELCMD < & %%% David Wang, fashion designer.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% David Wang, fashion designer.
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Original:  The panel contained the Chinese politician Liu Jianchao,who is the Chinese foreign ministry spokesman and Long Yongtu who is General Secretary for the Boao Forum for Asia, together with Chris Patten, the last Governor of Hong Kong, Isobel Hilton, a writer who has a large knowledge of China%DIFDELCMD < & %%% David Wang, fashion designer.
Revised:  The panel contained the Chinese politician Liu Jianchao,who is the Chinese foreign ministry spokesman and Long Yongtu who is General Secretary for the Boao Forum for Asia, together with Chris Patten, the last Governor of Hong Kong, Isobel Hilton, a writer who has a large knowledge of China%DIFDELCMD < & %%% 
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Original:  To see the show you can view from here
Revised:  NIGGA STOLE MY BIKE! 13075219
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Original:  The show was broadcasted on BBC One and BBC World;
Revised:  The show was broadcast on BBC One and BBC World;
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Original:  The program, which was part of a week-long BBC focus on China, was hailed as a sign that China was becomming more liberal and accomodating to Western media presence and involvement in China .
Revised:  The program, which was part of a week-long BBC focus on China, was hailed as a sign that China was becoming more liberal and accomodating to Western media presence and involvement in China .
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Original:  The program, which was part of a week-long BBC focus on China, was hailed as a sign that China was becomming more liberal and accomodating to Western media presence and involvement in China .
Revised:  The program, which was part of a week-long BBC focus on China, was hailed as a sign that China was becomming more liberal and accommodating to Western media presence and involvement in China .
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Original: Although the report proposes changing the role of the troops deployed in Iraq, progressively from combat to the training of Iraqi forces and the withdrawel of all combat troops by early 2008, depending on local conditions, the President made it clear that matters concerning the deployment of troops were for the military to determine.
Revised: Although the report proposes changing the role of the troops deployed in Iraq, progressively from combat to the training of Iraqi forces and the withdrawl of all combat troops by early 2008, depending on local conditions, the President made it clear that matters concerning the deployment of troops were for the military to determine.
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Original:  This was not a “fruit salad ” from which one could pick and choose.
Revised:  This was not a “fruit salad " from which one could pick and choose.
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Original:  Although the report proposes changing the role of the troops deployed in Iraq, progressively from combat to the training of Iraqi forces and the withdrawl of all combat troops by early 2008, depending on local conditions , the President made it clear that matters concerning the deployment of troops were for the military to determine.
Revised:  The report proposes progressive changes to the role of the troops deployed in Iraq, progressively from combat to the training of Iraqi forces and the withdrawl of all combat troops by early 2008, depending on local conditions , the President made it clear that matters concerning the deployment of troops were for the military to determine.
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Original:  Although the report proposes changing the role of the troops deployed in Iraq, progressively from combat to the training of Iraqi forces and the withdrawl of all combat troops by early 2008, depending on local conditions , the President made it clear that matters concerning the deployment of troops were for the military to determine.
Revised:  Although the report proposes changing the role of the troops deployed in Iraq, from combat to the training of Iraqi forces and the withdrawl of all combat troops by early 2008, depending on local conditions , the President made it clear that matters concerning the deployment of troops were for the military to determine.
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Original:  Although the report proposes changing the role of the troops deployed in Iraq, progressively from combat to the training of Iraqi forces and the withdrawl of all combat troops by early 2008, depending on local conditions , the President made it clear that matters concerning the deployment of troops were for the military to determine.
Revised:  Although the report proposes changing the role of the troops deployed in Iraq, progressively from combat to the training of Iraqi forces and the withdrawl of all combat troops by early 2008, depending on local conditions . The President made it clear that matters concerning the deployment of troops were for the military to determine.
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Original:  Syria would have to “stop destabilizing” the government of the Lebanon.
Revised:  Syria would have to "stop destabilizing" the government of the Lebanon.
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Original:  Iran must “verifiably suspend their nuclear enrichment program ".
Revised:  Iran must “verifiably suspend their nuclear enrichment program ."
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Original:  In declaring these conditions, Bush and  Blair, prime movers in the invasion of Iraq, are in agreement.
Revised:  In declaring these conditions, Bush and Tony Blair, prime movers in the invasion of Iraq, are in agreement.
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Original:  Reflecting the report’s recommendations that settling the Arab/Israeli disputes in the area should be given priority , Tony Blair, who has said that the key to solving the problems in Iraq, the Lebanon and elsewhere lay in settling the two-state disputes in Palestine , announced that he would be visiting the region shortly.
Revised:  Reflecting the report’s recommendations that settling the Arab/Israeli disputes in the area should be given priority . He has said that the key to solving the problems in Iraq, the Lebanon and elsewhere lay in settling the two-state disputes in Palestine , announced that he would be visiting the region shortly.
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Original:  Reflecting the report’s recommendations that settling the Arab/Israeli disputes in the area should be given priority , Tony Blair, who has said that the key to solving the problems in Iraq, the Lebanon and elsewhere lay in settling the two-state disputes in Palestine , announced that he would be visiting the region shortly.
Revised:  Reflecting the report’s recommendations that settling the Arab/Israeli disputes in the area should be given priority , Tony Blair, who has said that the key to solving the problems in Iraq, Lebanon, and elsewhere lay in settling the two-state disputes in Palestine , announced that he would be visiting the region shortly.
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Original:  Reflecting the report’s recommendations that settling the Arab/Israeli disputes in the area should be given priority , Tony Blair, who has said that the key to solving the problems in Iraq, the Lebanon and elsewhere lay in settling the two-state disputes in Palestine , announced that he would be visiting the region shortly.
Revised:  Reflecting the report’s recommendations that settling the Arab/Israeli disputes in the area should be given priority , Tony Blair, who has said that the key to solving the problems in Iraq, the Lebanon and elsewhere lay in settling the two-state disputes in Palestine . He announced that he would be visiting the region shortly.
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Original:  The President said he supported this initiative.
Revised:  President Bush said he supported this initiative.
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Original:  Responding to the assertion by Robert Gates, the new candidate US Secretary of Defense,  that Iran is surrounded by nuclear powers, including Israel , Shimon Peres, Israel’s deputy prime minister, refused to affirm or deny whether Israel had a nuclear weapons capability, saying that such uncertainty was a defense in itself.
Revised:  Robert Gates, the new candidate US Secretary of Defense, that Iran is surrounded by nuclear powers, including Israel , Shimon Peres, Israel’s deputy prime minister, refused to affirm or deny whether Israel had a nuclear weapons capability, saying that such uncertainty was a defense in itself.
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Original:  Responding to the assertion by Robert Gates, the new candidate US Secretary of Defense,  that Iran is surrounded by nuclear powers, including Israel , Shimon Peres, Israel’s deputy prime minister, refused to affirm or deny whether Israel had a nuclear weapons capability, saying that such uncertainty was a defense in itself.
Revised:  Responding to the assertion by Robert Gates, the new candidate US Secretary of Defense, that Iran is surrounded by nuclear powers, including Israel . Shimon Peres, Israel’s deputy prime minister, refused to affirm or deny whether Israel had a nuclear weapons capability, saying that such uncertainty was a defense in itself.
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Original: Don McKinnon, secretary general of the Commonwealth, said that the coup was a: "  serious violation of the Commonwealth's fundamental principles."
Revised: Don McKinnon, secretary general of the Commonwealth, described the coup as a: " serious violation of the Commonwealth's fundamental principles."
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Original: Don McKinnon, secretary general of the Commonwealth, said that the coup was a: "  serious violation of the Commonwealth's fundamental principles."
Revised: Don McKinnon, secretary general of the Commonwealth, said that the coup was a: " a serious violation of the Commonwealth's fundamental principles."
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Original:  New Zealand has barred the military leader  , Commander Frank Bainimarama, from visiting New Zealand where some of his family lives and has also banned season workers coming from Fiji to work in New Zealand   .
Revised:  New Zealand has barred the military leader , Commander Frank Bainimarama, from visiting New Zealand where some of his family live and has also banned season workers coming from Fiji to work in New Zealand .
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Original:  New Zealand has barred the military leader  , Commander Frank Bainimarama, from visiting New Zealand where some of his family lives and has also banned season workers coming from Fiji to work in New Zealand   .
Revised:  New Zealand has barred the military leader , Commander Frank Bainimarama, from visiting New Zealand where some of his family lives and has also banned seasonal workers coming from Fiji to work in New Zealand .
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Original:  New Zealand has barred the military leader  , Commander Frank Bainimarama, from visiting New Zealand where some of his family lives and has also banned season workers coming from Fiji to work in New Zealand   .
Revised:  New Zealand has barred the military leader , Commander Frank Bainimarama, from visiting New Zealand where some of his family lives and has also banned season workers coming from Fiji to work in New Zealand . .
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Original: At an urgent meeting held today in London the Commonwealth Realm has decided to suspend Fiji, following the military coup that took place in Fiji three days ago.
Revised: At an urgent meeting held today in London the Commonwealth has decided to suspend Fiji, following the military coup that took place in Fiji three days ago.
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Original: The suspension results in Fiji  taking part in any Commonwealth meetings nor activities.
Revised: The suspension results in Fiji not taking part in any Commonwealth meetings nor activities.
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Original:  It would be our endeavor to obviously engage with the regime as soon as we can in order to do what we can to bring the country back to democracy."
Revised:  It would be our endeavour to obviously engage with the regime as soon as we can in order to do what we can to bring the country back to democracy."
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Original:  However existing technical assistance will continue but no new assistance programs will be started.
Revised:  However existing technical assistance will continue but no new assistance programmes will be started.
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Original:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1FF-style observation that "DIVIDION BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
Revised:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1ff-style observation that "DIVIDION BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
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Original:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1ff-style observation that " DIVIDION BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
Revised:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1ff-style observation that " DIVISION BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
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Original: Commentators have pointed out that in the field of mathematical analysis, (which Anderson has defined axiomatically to be ) is the limit of several functions, each of which tends to a different value at its limit: has two different limits, depending from whether approaches zero from a positive or from a negative direction. also has two different limits.
Revised: Commentators have pointed out that in the field of mathematical analysis, (which Anderson has defined axiomatically to be ) is the limit of several functions, each of which tends to a different value at its limit: also has two different limits.
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Original:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1ff-style observation that " DIVISION BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
Revised:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1FF-style observation that " DIVISION BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
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Original:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1ff-style observation that " DIVISION BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
Revised:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1ff-style observation that " DIVIDION BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
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Original:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1FF-style observation that "DIVIDION  BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
Revised:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1FF-style observation that "DIVIDION (sic) BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
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Original:  Comments range from the humourous and the ironic, such as the B1FF-style observation that "DIVIDION(sic) BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
Revised:  Comments range from the humorous and the ironic, such as the B1FF-style observation that "DIVIDION(sic) BY ZERO IS IMPOSSIBLE BECAUSE MY CALCULATOR SAYS SO AND IT IS THE TRUTH" and the Chuck Norris Fact that "Only Chuck Norris can divide by zero." (to which another reader replied "Chuck Norris just looks at zero, and it divides itself.");
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Original: The resolution, in the 109-page compromise bill, based on high marginal support of the House-Senate conferees, will  sent directly to the US Senate which is  expected to also pass it unanimously by a voice vote today because the Congress is going into Christmas recess.
Revised: The resolution, in the 109-page compromise bill, based on high marginal support of the House-Senate conferees, will be sent directly to the US Senate which is expected to also pass it unanimously by a voice vote today because the Congress is going into Christmas recess.
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Original: The resolution, in the 109-page compromise bill, based on high marginal support of the House-Senate conferees, will  sent directly to the US Senate which is  expected to also pass it unanimously by a voice vote today because the Congress is going into Christmas recess.
Revised: The resolution, in the 109-page compromise bill, based on high marginal support of the House-Senate conferees, will sent directly to the US Senate which is also expected to also pass it unanimously by a voice vote today because the Congress is going into Christmas recess.
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