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Original:  President Obama meets with General McChrystal in 2009  The commission is a low-level White House advisory panel, created by first lady Michelle Obama and Jill Biden.
Revised:  President Obama meets with General McChrystal in 2009 President Obama meets with General McChrystal in 2009 The commission is a low-level White House advisory panel, created by first lady Michelle Obama and Jill Biden.
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Original:  "We've gotten very good at working together," he said  
Revised:  "We've gotten very good at working together," he said . 
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Original: Earlier this week officials raised the , the Japanese government nuclear authority, said officials had upgraded the crisis to a level seven on the —the same applied to the Chernobyl disaster—designating the crisis as a "major accident" with "wider consequences" than previously thought.
Revised: Earlier this week officials of , the Japanese government nuclear authority, said officials had upgraded the crisis to a level seven on the —the same applied to the Chernobyl disaster—designating the crisis as a "major accident" with "wider consequences" than previously thought.
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Original: Zoellick spoke in at the opening of the meetings of the World Bank and the International Monetary Fund  .
Revised: Zoellick spoke in at the opening of the meetings of the World Bank and the International Monetary Fund (IMF) .
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Original:  He hopes to discuss food policies with officials of the countries to develop a "code of conduct" on export bans and to encourage these countries to do more to increase food production and aid developing countries in managing agricultural problems.  
Revised:  He hopes to discuss food policies with officials of the countries to develop a "code of conduct" on export bans and to encourage these countries to do more to increase food production and aid developing countries in managing agricultural problems. At the meeting,
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Original: On Saturday, the World Bank and the IMF issued "Global Monitoring Report 2011: Improving the Odds of Achieving the MDGs" which said the world was still on track toward reaching a key goal of reducing the number of  people living in extreme poverty and hunger by half, to 883 million, by the target date of 2015.
Revised: On Saturday, the World Bank and the IMF issued "Global Monitoring Report 2011: Improving the Odds of Achieving the MDGs" which said the world was still on track toward reaching a key goal of reducing the number of the world's people living in extreme poverty and hunger by half, to 883 million, by the target date of 2015.
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Original:  For example, China is acquiring huge land tracts in Africa to grow food for the needs of the Chinese;
Revised:  For example, China is acquiring large amounts of land in Africa to grow food for the needs of the Chinese;
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Original: The United States Vice President Dick Cheney lobbied senate Republicans to exemt the CIA from the proposed ban on torture of terror suspects held by the United States.
Revised: The United States Vice President Dick Cheney lobbied Senate Republicans to exemt the CIA from the proposed ban on torture of terror suspects held by the United States.
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Original:  According to senators participating in the closed door-session, Cheney argued that the administration needs an exemption from the ban on "cruel, inhumane or degrading" treatment of detainees in United States custody to be effective in the fight against terrorism, although he also said that the United States does not engage in torture.
Revised:  According to senators participating in the closed door-session, Cheney argued that the administration needs an exemption from the ban on "cruel, inhumane or degrading" treatment of detainees in United States custody to be effective in the war on terrorism, although he also said that the United States does not engage in torture.
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Original:  The Vice Presidents appeal comes at a time when Congress is still dealing with the aftermath of the Abu-Graib prison scandal, as well as allegations of torture in Guantanamo Bay.
Revised:  The Vice President's appeal comes at a time when Congress is still dealing with the aftermath of the Abu-Graib prison scandal, as well as allegations of torture in Guantanamo Bay.
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Original:  The Vice Presidents appeal comes at a time when Congress is still dealing with the aftermath of the Abu-Graib prison scandal, as well as allegations of torture in Guantanamo Bay.
Revised:  The Vice Presidents appeal comes at a time when Congress is still dealing with the aftermath of the Abu Ghraib prison scandal, as well as allegations of torture in Guantanamo Bay.
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Original: The United States Vice President Dick Cheney lobbied Senate Republicans to exemt the CIA from the proposed ban on torture of terror suspects held by the United States.
Revised: The United States Vice President Dick Cheney lobbied Senate Republicans to exempt the CIA from the proposed ban on torture of terror suspects held by the United States.
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Original:  According to senators participating in the closed door-session, Cheney argued that the administration needs an exemption from the ban on "cruel, inhumane or degrading" treatment of detainees in United States custody to be effective in the  war on terrorism  , although he also said that the United States does not engage in torture.
Revised:  According to senators participating in the closed door-session, Cheney argued that the administration needs an exemption from the ban on "cruel, inhumane or degrading" treatment of detainees in United States custody to be effective in the " war on terrorism , although he also said that the United States does not engage in torture.
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Original:  According to senators participating in the closed door-session, Cheney argued that the administration needs an exemption from the ban on "cruel, inhumane or degrading" treatment of detainees in United States custody to be effective in the  war on terrorism  , although he also said that the United States does not engage in torture.
Revised:  According to senators participating in the closed door-session, Cheney argued that the administration needs an exemption from the ban on "cruel, inhumane or degrading" treatment of detainees in United States custody to be effective in the war on terrorism " , although he also said that the United States does not engage in torture.
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Original:  Lane has repeatedly denied any guilt in the murder, maintaining she gave the baby to its biological father, a man she first named as Andrew Morris, then Andrew Norris.
Revised:  Lane has repeatedly denied any guilt in the murder, maintaining she gave the baby to its biological father, a man she named as either Andrew Morris or Andrew Norris.
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Original:  Justice Whealy saidalthough he  believed Lane posed no further threat to society and was unlikely to re-offend, he said the taking the life of a completely defenceless baby was an abuse of a position of trust
Revised:  Justice Whealy saidalthough he However, although the judge believed Lane posed no further threat to society and was unlikely to re-offend, he said the taking the life of a completely defenceless baby was an abuse of a position of trust
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Original:  In his two-hour sentencing remarks, Justice Whealy said he accepted the Crown's claim that Lane had deliberately killed her baby, whom he said had been "murdered in a situation of desperation," arising  he said, "from a sense of entrapment and isolation".
Revised:  In his two-hour sentencing remarks, Justice Whealy said he accepted the Crown's claim that Lane had deliberately killed her baby, whom he said had been murdered " in a situation of desperation," arising he said, "from a sense of entrapment and isolation".
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Original:  In his two-hour sentencing remarks, Justice Whealy said he accepted the Crown's claim that Lane had deliberately killed her baby, whom he said had been "murdered in a situation of desperation," arising  he said, "from a sense of entrapment and isolation".
Revised:  In his two-hour sentencing remarks, Justice Whealy said he accepted the Crown's claim that Lane had deliberately killed her baby, whom he said had been "murdered in a situation of desperation," arising , he said, "from a sense of entrapment and isolation".
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Original:  rather she had a that caused her to behave illogically .
Revised:  rather she had a that caused her to feel illogically trapped and isolated .
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Original:  However, although the judge believed Lane posed no further threat to society and was unlikely to re-offend , he said the taking the life of a completely defenceless baby was an abuse of a position of trust
Revised:  The judge believed Lane posed no further threat to society and was unlikely to re-offend , he said the taking the life of a completely defenceless baby was an abuse of a position of trust
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Original:  However, although the judge believed Lane posed no further threat to society and was unlikely to re-offend , he said the taking the life of a completely defenceless baby was an abuse of a position of trust
Revised:  However, although the judge believed Lane posed no further threat to society and was unlikely to re-offend 
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Original:  In his two-hour sentencing remarks, Justice Whealy said he accepted the Crown's claim that Lane had deliberately killed her baby, whom he said had been murdered  " in a situation of desperation ," arising, he said, "from a sense of entrapment and isolation" .
Revised:  In his two-hour sentencing remarks, Justice Whealy said he accepted the Crown's claim that Lane had deliberately killed her baby, whom he said had been murdered . " in a situation of desperation ," arising, he said, "from a sense of entrapment and isolation" .
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Original:  In his two-hour sentencing remarks, Justice Whealy said he accepted the Crown's claim that Lane had deliberately killed her baby, whom he said had been murdered  " in a situation of desperation ," arising, he said, "from a sense of entrapment and isolation" .
Revised:  In his two-hour sentencing remarks, Justice Whealy said he accepted the Crown's claim that Lane had deliberately killed her baby, whom he said had been murdered " in a situation of desperation ," he said .
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Original: The organs of a 12-year old Palestinian boy mistakenly killed by Israeli soldiers have been transplanted to Israeli patients, helping to save their lives.
Revised: The organs of a 12 year-old Palestinian boy mistakenly killed by Israeli soldiers have been transplanted to Israeli patients, helping to save their lives.
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Original:  One of the recipient was 12 year-old Samah Gadban, who had been waiting for a new heart for five years.
Revised:  One of the recipients was 12 year-old Samah Gadban, who had been waiting for a new heart for five years.
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Original:  He added that saving lives was more important than religion and thinks that his son "has entered the heart of every Israeli . " 
Revised:  He added that saving lives was more important than religion and thinks that his son "has entered the heart of every Israeli " 
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Original:  He added that saving lives was more important than religion and thinks that his son "has entered the heart of every Israeli . " 
Revised:  He added that saving lives was more important than religion and thinks that his son "has entered the heart of every Israeli . " .
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Original: Ahmed's kidneys, liver, lungs and heart were transplated to a total of six patients, including Israeli Arabs, Jews and Druse .
Revised: Ahmed's kidneys, liver, lungs and heart were transplated to a total of six patients, including Israeli Arabs, Jews , and Druze .
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Original: Scientists have raised major concerns over repeated assurances from the industry and the government, who insist lessons have been learned from the environmental disaster in the Gulf of Mexico.  a professor at , said the oil industry was "is ill prepared at the least" to deal with another oil spill.
Revised: Scientists have raised major concerns over repeated assurances from the industry and the government, who insist lessons have been learned from the environmental disaster in the Gulf of Mexico. , a professor at , said the oil industry was "is ill prepared at the least" to deal with another oil spill.
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Original:  Under  pressure from industry executives the administration of president Barack Obama has resumed issuing drilling permits.
Revised:  Under However, under pressure from industry executives the administration of president Barack Obama has resumed issuing drilling permits.
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Original:  These are moneymaking machines and they make money by pushing things to the limit." , the oil company which operated Deepwater Horizon, has insisted it has changed safety procedures.
Revised:  These are moneymaking machines and they make money by pushing things to the limit." BP has insisted it has changed safety procedures.
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Original:  The oil giant came under heavy criticism for how it handled the crisis, and other major oil companies insisted Deepwater Horizon was a result of a culture exclusive to BP. , the director of , the U.S. organization responsible for regulating offshore drilling, said the view was "as disappointing as it is shortsighted," and the issue of deep water safety was "a broad problem.    
Revised:  The oil giant came under heavy criticism for how it handled the crisis, and other major oil companies insisted Deepwater Horizon was a result of a culture exclusive to BP. , the director of , the U.S. organization responsible for regulating offshore drilling, said the view was "as disappointing as it is shortsighted," and the issue of deep water safety was "a broad problem. " 
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Original:  I'm angry, I've been angry a long time.  
Revised:  I'm angry, I've been angry a long time. " 
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Original:  The oil giant came under heavy criticism for how it handled the crisis, and other major oil companies insisted Deepwater Horizon was a result of a culture exclusive to BP. , the director of , the U.S. organization responsible for regulating offshore drilling, said the view was "as disappointing as it is shortsighted," and the issue of deep water safety was "a broad problem."
Revised:  The oil giant came under heavy criticism for how it handled the crisis, and other major oil companies insisted Deepwater Horizon was a result of a culture exclusive to BP. , the director of , the U.S. government agency responsible for regulating offshore drilling, said the view was "as disappointing as it is shortsighted," and the issue of deep water safety was "a broad problem."
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Original: Protesters yesterday rallied outside BP's annual conference in London  , where shareholders met for the first time since the disaster off the Gulf coast.
Revised: Protesters rallied outside BP's annual conference in London , where shareholders met for the first time since the disaster off the Gulf coast.
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Original:  Pentobarbital, a seditive, is used to control epileptic seizures as well as many other uses . After sodium thiopental became scarce in the US late last year, the US began to use pentobarbital as a substitute.
Revised:  Pentobarbital, a seditive, is used to control s as well as many other uses . After sodium thiopental became scarce in the US late last year, the US began to use pentobarbital as a substitute.
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Original:  Pentobarbital, a seditive, is used to control epileptic seizures as well as many other uses . After sodium thiopental became scarce in the US late last year, the US began to use pentobarbital as a substitute.
Revised:  Pentobarbital, a seditive, is used to control epileptic seizures as well as to treat a variety of medical conditions . After sodium thiopental became scarce in the US late last year, the US began to use pentobarbital as a substitute.
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Original: ]] Britain announced Thursday that it will ban the export to the US of three pharmaceutical drugs used for s in execution of the death penalty.
Revised: ]] Britain announced Thursday that it will ban the export to the US of three pharmaceutical drugs used for s in executions under the death penalty.
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Original:   " Cable said he was requesting all countries in the EUto do the same in order to effectively control the export of these drugs.
Revised:  " Cable said he was requesting all countries in the EU to do the same in order to effectively control the export of these drugs.
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Original:  Pentobarbital, a seditive , is used to control s as well as to treat a variety of  medical conditions.
Revised:  Pentobarbital, a sedative , is used to control s as well as to treat a variety of medical conditions.
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Original:  Pentobarbital, a seditive , is used to control s as well as to treat a variety of  medical conditions.
Revised:  Pentobarbital, a seditive , is used to control s as well as to treat a variety of other medical conditions.
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Original:  After sodium thiopental became scarce in the US late last year, the US began to use pentobarbital as a substitute   .
Revised:  After sodium thiopental became scarce in the US late last year, the US began to use pentobarbital as a substitute . .
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Original: The  drugs are , and . U.K. Business Secretary said the order will be formalized within the next few days.
Revised: The three drugs are , and . U.K. Business Secretary said the order will be formalized within the next few days.
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Original: The  drugs are , and . U.K. Business Secretary said the order will be formalized within the next few days.
Revised: The drugs are , and . UK Business Secretary said the order will be formalized within the next few days.
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Original:  He issued a statement saying, "We oppose the death penalty in all circumstances and are clear that British drugs should not be used to carry out lethal injections.
Revised:  Cable issued a statement saying, "We oppose the death penalty in all circumstances and are clear that British drugs should not be used to carry out lethal injections.
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Original:  That is why we introduced a control on last year - the first of its kind in the world.
Revised:  That is why we introduced a control on last year — the first of its kind in the world.
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Original:  Sodium thiopental had been sold to the in two states, Georgia and Arizona  by a small wholesaler in London.
Revised:  Sodium thiopental had been sold to the in two states, Georgia and Arizona , by a small wholesaler in London.
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Original:  The drug is legally used for lethal injections in the U.S. but is in short supply there.
Revised:  The drug is legally used for lethal injections in the US but is in short supply there.
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Original:  Pentobarbital, a sedative, is used to control continuous by inducing a short-acting coma , as well as to treat a variety of other medical conditions.
Revised:  Pentobarbital, a sedative, is used to control continuous , as well as to treat a variety of other medical conditions.
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Original:  The said in December that executions in the US had declined in 2010 compared to previous years, and that a shortage of sodium thiopental is part of the reason .
Revised:  The said in December that executions in the US had declined in 2010 compared to previous years, partly as a result of a shortage of sodium thiopental is part of the reason .
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Original:  The said in December that executions in the US had declined in 2010 compared to previous years, and that a shortage of sodium thiopental is part of the reason .
Revised:  The said in December that executions in the US had declined in 2010 compared to previous years, and that a shortage of sodium thiopental .
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Original:  The U.K. government said in a press release: "Having consulted UK suppliers of these drugs and other interested parties, the Government is satisfied that legitimate medical trade will not be hampered by the decision."
Revised:  The UK government said in a press release: "Having consulted UK suppliers of these drugs and other interested parties, the Government is satisfied that legitimate medical trade will not be hampered by the decision."
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Original:  And it is also why we are now controlling the export of the other drugs used in lethal injections in the U.S ."
Revised:  And it is also why we are now controlling the export of the other drugs used in lethal injections in the US ."
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Original:  However, protests in reportedly turned violent as security forces were said to disperse the crowds with batons and tear gas to prevent protesters reaching the capital ’ s main square.
Revised:  However, protests in reportedly turned violent as security forces were said to disperse the crowds with batons and tear gas to prevent protesters reaching the capital ' s main square.
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Original:  The protests continue as Syria’s President, fails to lift the emergency law the country has operated under since his Arab Socialist came to power in 1963.
Revised:  The protests continued as Syria’s President, fails to lift the emergency law the country has operated under since his Arab Socialist came to power in 1963.
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Original:  The protests continue as Syria’s President, fails to lift the emergency law the country has operated under since his Arab Socialist came to power in 1963.
Revised:  The protests continue as Syria’s President, failed to lift the emergency law the country has operated under since his Arab Socialist came to power in 1963.
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Original:  After a meeting of NATO country foreign ministers in Berlin, US Secretary of State Hillary Clinton said, "The Syrian government did not meet the legitimate demands of the Syrian people.
Revised:  After a meeting of NATO foreign ministers in Berlin, US Secretary of State Hillary Clinton said, "The Syrian government did not meet the legitimate demands of the Syrian people.
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Original:  Assad met with a delegation from Daraa yesterday.
Revised:  Assad met with a delegation from yesterday.
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Original:  Al Jazeera correspondent Amin said, "It seems from the people in Daraa that the government is seriously trying to contain [the situation in] Daraa because that is where it all started.
Revised:  Al Jazeera correspondent Amin said, "It seems from the people in Dara'a that the government is seriously trying to contain [the situation in] Daraa because that is where it all started.
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Original:  If they manage to calm the situation in Daraa , the government believes it will be able to contain the situation throughout Syria.
Revised:  If they manage to calm the situation in Dara'a , the government believes it will be able to contain the situation throughout Syria.
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Original:  Al Jazeera correspondent Amin said, "It seems from the people in Dara'a that the government is seriously trying to contain [the situation in] Daraa because that is where it all started.
Revised:  Al Jazeera correspondent Amin said, "It seems from the people in Daraa that the government is seriously trying to contain [the situation in] Daraa because that is where it all started.
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Original:  If they manage to calm the situation in Dara'a , the government believes it will be able to contain the situation throughout Syria.
Revised:  If they manage to calm the situation in Daraa , the government believes it will be able to contain the situation throughout Syria.
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