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Original: Don Karkos 's problems began one day after the attack on Pearl Harbor when he enlisted in the navy.
Revised: Don Karkos 's problems began one day after the attack on Pearl Harbor while he was enlisted in the navy.
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Original:  On a warm summer morning in 1942 while serving on the tanker , USS Rapaden , it exploded.
Revised:  In 1942 while serving on the tanker , USS Rapaden , it exploded.
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Original:  On a warm summer morning in 1942 while serving on the tanker , USS Rapaden , it exploded.
Revised:  On a warm summer morning in 1942 , the tanker USS Rapaden exploded.
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Original:  Metal from the explosion hit Don Karkos above his right eye, cutting open his head.
Revised:  Metal from the explosion hit Don Karkos above his right eye, cutting his head.
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Original:  Due to the lost of his peripheral vision he kept banging into walls and even people.
Revised:  Life was extremely difficult with the loss of peripheral sight. Inadvertently, Don Karkos ran into walls and even people.
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Original:  Due to the lost of his peripheral vision he kept banging into walls and even people.
Revised:  Due to the lost of his peripheral vision he kept banging into walls and people.
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Original:  Three years ago he was told even with the advances of medical technology he would not be able regain his visionin his right eye .
Revised:  Three years ago he was told even with the advances of medical technology he would not be able to restore his vision, even with the current advances in medicine .
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Original:  A few months ago  while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, the horse hit him in the head above his right eye.
Revised:  A few months ago , while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, the horse hit him in the head above his right eye.
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Original:  That evening while rubbing his good eye, he realized he could once again see through the  eye.
Revised:  That evening while rubbing his good eye, he realized he could once again see through the disabled eye.
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Original:  After the holidays  he plans to visit a doctor
Revised:  After the holidays , he plans to visit a doctor
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Original:  Metal from the explosion hit Don Karkos above his right eye , cutting his head . Later, when Don Karkos woke up, he was in a military hospital in Iceland.
Revised:  Metal from the explosion hit Don Karkos above his right eye . Later, when Don Karkos woke up, he was in a military hospital in Iceland.
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Original:  Metal from the explosion hit Don Karkos above his right eye , cutting his head . Later, when Don Karkos woke up, he was in a military hospital in Iceland.
Revised:  Metal from the explosion hit Don Karkos above his right eye , cutting his head . Don Karkos awoke in a military hospital in Iceland.
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Original:  Inadvertently, Don Karkos ran into wallsand people.
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Original:  A few months ago, while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, Chimo hit Don Karkos in the head above his right eye .
Revised:  Amazingly, a few months ago, while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, Chimo hit Don Karkos in the head above his right eye .
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Original:  A few months ago, while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, Chimo hit Don Karkos in the head above his right eye .
Revised:  A few months ago, while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, Don Karkos was hit in the head above his right eye .
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Original:  After the holidays, he plans to visit a doctor 
Revised:  Don Karkos plans to visit a doctor 
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Original:  Amazingly, a few months ago, while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, Don Karkos was hit in the head by Chimo close to the location of his shrapnel injury.
Revised:  Afew months ago, while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, Don Karkos was hit in the head by Chimo close to the location of his shrapnel injury.
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Original:  Don Karkos plans to visit a doctor about the unlikely recovery after the holiday season
Revised:  Don Karkos plans to visit a doctor after the holiday season
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Original:  Afew months ago, while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, Don Karkos was hit in the head by Chimo close to the location of his shrapnel injury.
Revised:  A few months ago, while tightening the harness of Chimo, a racehorse at the Monticello Raceway in Monticello, New York, Don Karkos was hit in the head by Chimo close to the location of his shrapnel injury.
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Original: Professor Stephen Hawking conclude today his eight-days visit in Israel and the Palestinian Authority.
Revised: Professor Stephen Hawking today concluded his eight-day visit to Israel and the Palestinian Authority.
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Original:  The visit  organised by the British Embassy and the British Coucil .
Revised:  The visit was organised by the British Embassy and the British Coucil .
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Original:  The visit  organised by the British Embassy and the British Coucil .
Revised:  The visit organised by the British Embassy and the British Council .
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Original:  The world-famous scientist and best-selling author of A Brief History of Time embodies the UK’s scientific excellence and his visit had promoted Britain as the international partner of choice in science and technology collaboration.
Revised:  The world-famous scientist and best-selling author of A Brief History of Time embodies the UK’s scientific excellence and his visit has promoted Britain as the international partner of choice in science and technology collaboration.
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Original:  This evening, December 14, Professor Hawking gave a public lecture to over 1,000 people at Hebrew University on "The Origin Of the Universe ".(see the transcript in the link).
Revised:  This evening, December 14, Professor Hawking gave a public lecture to over 1,000 people at Hebrew University on "The Origin Of the Universe ."
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Original:  In between he met ALS patients and gave them courage , and visit the jewish arab  joint village of Newe Shalom .
Revised:  In between he met ALS patients and gave them courage . joint village of Newe Shalom .
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Original:  Prof. Hawking also visited Tel Aviv University, Weizmann Institute and at Birzeit University in Ramallah (at the Palestinian Authority) .
Revised:  Prof. Hawking also visited Tel Aviv University, Weizmann Institute of Science and the Birzeit University in Ramallah (at the Palestinian Authority) .
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Original:  Prof. Hawking also visited Tel Aviv University, Weizmann Institute and at Birzeit University in Ramallah (at the Palestinian Authority) .
Revised:  Prof. Hawking also visited Tel Aviv University, Weizmann Institute and at Birzeit University in Ramallah (at the Palestinian Authority) 
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Original:  Also on that day, Professor Hawking met the Prime Minister of Isreal Ehud Olmert.
Revised:  Also on that day, Professor Hawking met the Prime Minister of Israel Ehud Olmert.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This evening, December 14, Professor Hawking gave a public lecture to over 1,000 people at the Hebrew University of Jerusalem on "The Origin Of the Universe."
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Original:  In between he met other Amyotrophic lateral sclerosis (ALS) patients and gave them courage.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He also visited the Jewish/Arab joint village of Neve Shalom/Wāĥat as-Salām, Tel Aviv University, Weizmann Institute of Science and the Birzeit University in Ramallah (in Palestine) ] 
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Original:  The world-famous scientist and best-selling author of A Brief History of Time embodies the UK ’ s scientific excellence and his visit has promoted Britain as the international partner of choice in science and technology collaboration.
Revised:  The world-famous scientist and best-selling author of A Brief History of Time embodies the UK ' s scientific excellence and his visit has promoted Britain as the international partner of choice in science and technology collaboration.
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Original:  Boyle is the father of comedian Ray Romano, who played Boyles son on the sitcom which ran from 1996 to 2005. Source
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Original: Boyle played  character Frank Barone,  father of Ray Barone aka Ray Romano , on Everybody Loves Raymond.
Revised: Boyle played the character Frank Barone, father of Ray Barone aka Ray Romano , on Everybody Loves Raymond.
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Original: Boyle played  character Frank Barone,  father of Ray Barone aka Ray Romano , on Everybody Loves Raymond.
Revised: Boyle played character Frank Barone, who is the father of Ray Barone aka Ray Romano , on Everybody Loves Raymond.
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Original: Boyle played  character Frank Barone,  father of Ray Barone aka Ray Romano , on Everybody Loves Raymond.
Revised: Boyle played character Frank Barone, father of Ray Barone (played by Ray Romano) , on Everybody Loves Raymond.
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Original: Ed Stelmach was officially swon in as the 13th Premier of Alberta Thursday.
Revised: Ed Stelmach was officially sworn in as the 13th Premier of Alberta Thursday.
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Original:  "   Ontario is content to permit the peaceful occupation of its property," the decision reads.
Revised:  " " Ontario is content to permit the peaceful occupation of its property," the decision reads.
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Original:  However Ingrid Rijniers is refusing to co-operate with the department as they refused to give her the money to go back to Holland.
Revised:  However, Ingrid Rijniers is refusing to co-operate with the department as they refused to give her the money to go back to Holland.
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Original:  However Ingrid Rijniers is refusing to co-operate with the department as they refused to give her the money to go back to Holland.
Revised:  However Ingrid Rijniers is refusing to co-operate with the department because they refused to give her the money to go back to Holland.
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Original:  However Ingrid Rijniers is refusing to co-operate with the department as they refused to give her the money to go back to Holland.
Revised:  However Ingrid Rijniers is refusing to co-operate with the department as they refused to give her the money to return to Holland.
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Original:  The New Zealand Corrections Department confirm that they are investigating the serious claims and are taking them seriously but say that they have not found sufficient evidence yet to back up the claims.
Revised:  The New Zealand Corrections Department says it is taking these claims seriously but has not yet found sufficient evidence yet to back up the claims.
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Original:  The New Zealand Corrections Department confirm that they are investigating the serious claims and are taking them seriously but say that they have not found sufficient evidence yet to back up the claims.
Revised:  The New Zealand Corrections Department confirm that they are investigating the serious claims and are taking them seriously but say that they have not found sufficient evidence to back up the claims.
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Original:  These claims also come as teenage prisoner, Liam Ashley was strangled to death in a prison van by a much older adult prisoner.
Revised:  In addition, a teenage prisoner, Liam Ashley was strangled to death in a prison van by a much older adult prisoner.
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Original:  These claims also come as teenage prisoner, Liam Ashley was strangled to death in a prison van by a much older adult prisoner.
Revised:  These claims also come as teenage prisoner, Liam Ashley , was recently strangled to death in a prison van by a much older adult prisoner.
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Original:  Mr Power said that with all these new claims emerging  Mr O'Conner should resign as the minister of corrections
Revised:  Mr Power said that with all these new claims emerging , Mr O'Conner should resign as the minister of corrections
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Original: Microsoft is also in trouble in Europe due to the anti-trust laws of the Eropean Union.
Revised: In the meantime, Microsoft is in trouble in Europe due to the anti-trust laws of the Eropean Union.
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Original:  For instance, on July 12, 2006, EU announced a 280.5 million euro fine against Microsoft and threatened new penalties of 3 million euros ($3.82 million) a day beginning July 31
Revised:  On July 12, 2006, EU announced a 280.5 million euro fine against Microsoft and threatened new penalties of 3 million euros ($3.82 million) a day beginning July 31
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Original: In the meantime, Microsoft is in trouble in Europe due to the anti-trust laws of the Eropean Union.
Revised: In the meantime, Microsoft is in trouble in Europe due to the anti-trust laws of the European Union.
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Original: A Toronto-based team of scientists has discovered a trigger for Type 1 diabetes, a monstrous breakthrough that has long evaded discovery and could lead to the overall prevention of the disease.
Revised: A Toronto-based team of scientists has discovered a trigger for Type 1 diabetes, a breakthrough that has long evaded discovery and could lead to the overall prevention of the disease.
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Original:  "If they do, then we have fantastic new therapeutic strategies," said Dosch, who is also a professor of pediatrics and immunology at U of T  . Insulin is a hormone produced by the islet cells that stabilizes blood sugar levels in the body.
Revised:  "If they do, then we have fantastic new therapeutic strategies," said Dosch, who is also a professor of pediatrics and immunology at U of T (University of Toronto) . Insulin is a hormone produced by the islet cells that stabilizes blood sugar levels in the body.
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Original:  The injections are not a cure and they do not protect against side-effects of the disease like stroke, blindness, heart attack  and kidney failure.
Revised:  The injections are not a cure and they do not protect against side-effects of the disease like stroke, blindness, heart attack , and kidney failure.
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Original:  Now we have a new player. "
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Original: Still, he knows that the discovery of nerves controlling pancreatic functions is a major step towards developing more efficient treatment for the millions affected worldwide.
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Original:  Now we have a new player.  
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Original: A Toronto team of scientists have discovered a trigger for Type 1 diabetes, a breakthrough that could lead to the overall prevention of the common disease.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% According to Dr. Hans Michael Dosch, a senior scientist at Toronto's Hospital for Sick Children and the study's lead investigator, this indicates the diabetes may be a disease of the nervous system, not just an autoimmune disease.
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Original:  Traditionally, research has primarily been concentrated on the immune system and the reasons why it attacks and destroys the insulin-producing cells of the pancreas, called islets.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% But Dosch, working alongside colleagues at Sick Kids, the University of Calgary in Alberta and Maine's Jackson Laboratory, identified a control circuit between islet cells and their associated sensory nerves.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "This control circuit is the real cause of diabetes," Dosch said.
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Original:  Experts agree the findings, reported yesterday in the journal Cell, will dramatically change the foundations of diabetes research.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "It really is a breakthrough for the diabetes community," said Pam Ohashi, a professor of immunology at the University of Toronto and a senior scientist at the Campbell Family Institute for Breast Cancer Research.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "If they do, then we have fantastic new therapeutic strategies," said Dosch, who is also a professor of pediatrics and immunology at U of T (University of Toronto).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wing said she was moved to tears when she learned that researchers may have found a way to one day prevent Type 1 diabetes.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% More research will be put in motion quickly to see if the same treatment applied to the lab mice will be effective in humans for preventing Type 1 diabetes, or better still, if it will shed new light on treatment methods for Type 2 sufferers, according to Dosch.
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Original:  Also, in a surprising twist, the researchers also found that injecting substance P, a chemical secreted by nerve cells, into the mice who had damaged or inflamed islet cells, not only eliminated the inflammation process, but reversed it.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The blood glucose normalizes overnight and it stays low for weeks to months — this is with a single shot," Dosch said.
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Original:  Still, he knows that the discovery of nerves controlling pancreatic functions is a major step towards developing more efficient treatment for the millions affected worldwide
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Original: fuck A Toronto team of scientists have discovered a trigger for Type 1 diabetes, a breakthrough that could lead to the overall prevention of the common disease.
Revised:  A Toronto team of scientists have discovered a trigger for Type 1 diabetes, a breakthrough that could lead to the overall prevention of the common disease.
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Original:  + fuck - - The team discovered that abnormal nerve endings in the pancreas' insulin-producing cells initiated a chain reaction that caused Type 1 diabetes in lab mice.
Revised:  - - The team discovered that abnormal nerve endings in the pancreas' insulin-producing cells initiated a chain reaction that caused Type 1 diabetes in lab mice.
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Original: A Toronto team of scientists have discovered a trigger for Type 1 diabetes, a breakthrough that could lead to the overall prevention of the common disease. - - The team discovered that abnormal nerve endings in the pancreas' insulin-producing cells initiated a chain reaction that caused Type 1 diabetes in lab mice.
Revised: A Toronto team of scientists have discovered a trigger for Type 1 diabetes, a breakthrough that could lead to the overall prevention of the common disease. The team discovered that abnormal nerve endings in the pancreas' insulin-producing cells initiated a chain reaction that caused Type 1 diabetes in lab mice.
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Original:  - But Dosch, working alongside colleagues at Sick Kids, the University of Calgary in Alberta and Maine's Jackson Laboratory, identified a control circuit between islet cells and their associated sensory nerves. - - Disruption of this circuit led to inflammation around the islets and eventually to their destruction.
Revised:  - But Dosch, working alongside colleagues at Sick Kids, the University of Calgary in Alberta and Maine's Jackson Laboratory, identified a control circuit between islet cells and their associated sensory nerves. Disruption of this circuit led to inflammation around the islets and eventually to their destruction.
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Original:  - Experts agree the findings, reported yesterday in the journal Cell, will dramatically change the foundations of diabetes research. - - "It really is a breakthrough for the diabetes community," said Pam Ohashi, a professor of immunology at the University of Toronto and a senior scientist at the Campbell Family Institute for Breast Cancer Research. - - Dosch plans to move quickly in transferring his tests on lab mice to human subjects.
Revised:  - Experts agree the findings, reported yesterday in the journal Cell, will dramatically change the foundations of diabetes research. "It really is a breakthrough for the diabetes community," said Pam Ohashi, a professor of immunology at the University of Toronto and a senior scientist at the Campbell Family Institute for Breast Cancer Research. - - Dosch plans to move quickly in transferring his tests on lab mice to human subjects.
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Original:  - Experts agree the findings, reported yesterday in the journal Cell, will dramatically change the foundations of diabetes research. - - "It really is a breakthrough for the diabetes community," said Pam Ohashi, a professor of immunology at the University of Toronto and a senior scientist at the Campbell Family Institute for Breast Cancer Research. - - Dosch plans to move quickly in transferring his tests on lab mice to human subjects.
Revised:  - Experts agree the findings, reported yesterday in the journal Cell, will dramatically change the foundations of diabetes research. - - "It really is a breakthrough for the diabetes community," said Pam Ohashi, a professor of immunology at the University of Toronto and a senior scientist at the Campbell Family Institute for Breast Cancer Research. Dosch plans to move quickly in transferring his tests on lab mice to human subjects.
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Original:  He plans to launch a clinical trial in January to figure out if human patients who have a high risk of Type 1 diabetes have the same sensory nerve abnormalities displayed by the mice. - - "If they do, then we have fantastic new therapeutic strategies," said Dosch, who is also a professor of pediatrics and immunology at U of T (University of Toronto).
Revised:  He plans to launch a clinical trial in January to figure out if human patients who have a high risk of Type 1 diabetes have the same sensory nerve abnormalities displayed by the mice. "If they do, then we have fantastic new therapeutic strategies," said Dosch, who is also a professor of pediatrics and immunology at U of T (University of Toronto).
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Original:  - - Michelle Wing knows the toll diabetes takes on a family.
Revised:  Michelle Wing knows the toll diabetes takes on a family.
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Original:  Dosch plans to invite the family to participate in the clinical trial. - - Wing said she was moved to tears when she learned that researchers may have found a way to one day prevent Type 1 diabetes. - - "Seeing what Marielle goes through every day of her life, to prevent other children from going through that," Wing said.
Revised:  Dosch plans to invite the family to participate in the clinical trial. Wing said she was moved to tears when she learned that researchers may have found a way to one day prevent Type 1 diabetes. - - "Seeing what Marielle goes through every day of her life, to prevent other children from going through that," Wing said.
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