wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia, after what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid following what was believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate.
Revised: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia, after what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid after what was commonly believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate.
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Original:  The sudden political reversal for Allen was exceeded by the Democratic Party’s ability to frame the election as a  referendum on the war in Iraq.
Revised:  The sudden political reversal for Allen was exceeded by the Democratic Party’s ability to frame the election as a national referendum on the war in Iraq.
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Original:  The margin by which Webb won was 9,000 votes    
Revised:  The margin by which Webb won was 9,000 votes . 
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Original: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia , follows what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid after what was commonly believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate .
Revised: The concession by Allen in traditionally Republican Virginia , follows what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid after what was commonly believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate .
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Original: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia , follows what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid after what was commonly believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate .
Revised: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia follows what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid after what was commonly believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate .
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Original: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia , follows what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid after what was commonly believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate .
Revised: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia , follows what were once prospects for an Allen 2008 presidential bid after what was commonly believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate .
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Original: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia , follows what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid after what was commonly believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate .
Revised: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia , follows what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid . An easy Allen re-election campaign to the Senate .
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Original:   The state constitutional amendment banning recognition of same-sex marriage supported by Allen, but opposed by Webb and Governor Tim Kaine, and most Northern Vrginians, worked against Allen in the election . Democrats may have succeeded nationally to draw on the issue of Iraq, but local politics were very much in play in Northern Virginia
Revised:  Democrats may have succeeded nationally to draw on the issue of Iraq, but local politics were very much in play in Northern Virginia. The state constitutional amendment banning recognition of same-sex marriage supported by Allen, but opposed by Webb and Governor Tim Kaine, and most Northern Vrginians, worked against Allen in the election . Democrats may have succeeded nationally to draw on the issue of Iraq, but local politics were very much in play in Northern Virginia
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Original:   The state constitutional amendment banning recognition of same-sex marriage supported by Allen, but opposed by Webb and Governor Tim Kaine, and most Northern Vrginians, worked against Allen in the election . Democrats may have succeeded nationally to draw on the issue of Iraq, but local politics were very much in play in Northern Virginia
Revised:  The state constitutional amendment banning recognition of same-sex marriage supported by Allen, but opposed by Webb and Governor Tim Kaine, and most Northern Vrginians, worked against Allen in the election Democrats may have succeeded nationally to draw on the issue of Iraq, but local politics were very much in play in Northern Virginia
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Original:   The state constitutional amendment banning recognition of same-sex marriage supported by Allen, but opposed by Webb and Governor Tim Kaine, and most Northern Vrginians, worked against Allen in the election . Democrats may have succeeded nationally to draw on the issue of Iraq, but local politics were very much in play in Northern Virginia
Revised:  The state constitutional amendment banning recognition of same-sex marriage supported by Allen, but opposed by Webb and Governor Tim Kaine, and most Northern Vrginians, worked against Allen in the election . 
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Original: " The people of Virginia have spoken, they have spoken in a closely divided voice.
Revised: " Its about time the people of Virginia have spoken, they have spoken in a closely divided voice.
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Original: " Its about time the people of Virginia have spoken, they have spoken in a closely divided voice.
Revised: " The people of Virginia have spoken, they have spoken in a closely divided voice.
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Original: Last night, CNN edited out portions of Larry King's "live" interview with Bill Mahar for the west coast showing, and removed the same portions from the online transcript.
Revised: Last night, CNN edited out portions of Larry King's "live" interview with Bill Maher for the west coast showing, and removed the same portions from the online transcript.
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Original:  Bill Mahar : Well, I wouldn't be the first.
Revised:  Bill Maher : Well, I wouldn't be the first.
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Original:  Bill Mahar : Maybe you don't go to the same bathhouse I do, Larry.
Revised:  Bill Maher : Maybe you don't go to the same bathhouse I do, Larry.
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Original: Last thursday, CNN edited out portions of Larry King's "live" interview with BillMaher for the west coast showing, and removed the same portions from the online transcript.
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Original:  The deleted portions consisted of Bill Maher saying that Republican National Committee chair Ken Mehlman was gay.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Here is the deleted portion of the transcript: Larry King: You will name them?
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Larry King: You will name them?
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Original:  That's a much more elegant solution than having the user choose which site to go to 
Revised:  That's a much more elegant solution than having the user choose which site to go to .
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Original: Opera CEO Jon S. von Tetzchner has spoken against the creation of DotMobi , a domain extension for mobile devices saying that it is a "total waste of time" and "completely unnecessary."
Revised: Opera CEO Jon S. von Tetzchner has spoken against the creation of .mobi , a domain extension for mobile devices saying that it is a "total waste of time" and "completely unnecessary."
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Original:  He continued saying "There should be one Internet ," he says."
Revised:  He continued saying "There should be one Internet ...
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Original:  Opera and Sun are actually developing a browser for refrigerators 
Revised:  Opera and Sun are actually developing a browser for refrigerators .
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Original: right Opera CEO Jon S. von Tetzchner has spoken against the creation of .mobi, a domain extension for mobile devices saying that it is a "total waste of time" and "completely unnecessary."
Revised:  Opera CEO Jon S. von Tetzchner has spoken against the creation of .mobi, a domain extension for mobile devices saying that it is a "total waste of time" and "completely unnecessary."
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Original:  Microsoft, Google, and Nokia are some of the supporters of . mob
Revised:  Microsoft, Google, and Nokia are some of the supporters of . mobi
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Original: Italian Giancarlo Fisichella has won the Australian Formula 1 Grand Prix in Melbourne , the opening Grand Prix of the 2005 season.
Revised:  has won the Australian Formula 1 Grand Prix in Melbourne , the opening Grand Prix of the 2005 season.
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Original: Italian Giancarlo Fisichella has won the Australian Formula 1 Grand Prix in Melbourne , the opening Grand Prix of the 2005 season.
Revised: Italian Giancarlo Fisichella has won the Grand Prix in Melbourne , the opening Grand Prix of the 2005 season.
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Original: Italian Giancarlo Fisichella has won the Australian Formula 1 Grand Prix in Melbourne , the opening Grand Prix of the 2005 season.
Revised: Italian Giancarlo Fisichella has won the Australian Formula 1 Grand Prix in , the opening Grand Prix of the 2005 season.
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Original:  Fisichella, driving a Renault , started from pole position leading for the majority of the 57 lap event.
Revised:  Fisichella, driving a , started from pole position leading for the majority of the 57 lap event.
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Original:  Fisichella, driving a Renault , started from pole position leading for the majority of the 57 lap event.
Revised:  Fisichella, driving a Renault , started from leading for the majority of the 57 lap event.
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Original:  Fellow Renault driver Fernando Alonso finished third, with Ferrari's Rubens Barrichello separating the pair.
Revised:  Fellow Renault driver finished third, with Ferrari's Rubens Barrichello separating the pair.
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Original:  Fellow Renault driver Fernando Alonso finished third, with Ferrari's Rubens Barrichello separating the pair.
Revised:  Fellow Renault driver Fernando Alonso finished third, with 's separating the pair.
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Original:  It was an unhappy weekend for defending world champion Michael Schumacher , who began from the rear of the field after his qualifying hopes were severely dented by Melbourne's changeable weather.
Revised:  It was an unhappy weekend for defending world champion , who began from the rear of the field after his qualifying hopes were severely dented by Melbourne's changeable weather.
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Original:  Schumacher made steady progress through the field during the race but retired on lap 43 after a collision with fellow German Nick Heidfeld .
Revised:  Schumacher made steady progress through the field during the race but retired on lap 43 after a collision with fellow German .
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Original:  The next grand prix is scheduled for March 13 in Malaysia
Revised:  The next grand prix is scheduled for March 13 in 
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Original: Stpehen Harperhas proposed along with MADD Canada  to amend the Criminal Code to make high on drugs while driving just as unacceptable as drunk driving.
Revised: Stephen Harper, along with MADD Canada to amend the Criminal Code to make high on drugs while driving just as unacceptable as drunk driving.
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Original: Stpehen Harperhas proposed along with MADD Canada  to amend the Criminal Code to make high on drugs while driving just as unacceptable as drunk driving.
Revised: Stpehen Harperhas proposed along with MADD Canada , has proposed to amend the Criminal Code to make high on drugs while driving just as unacceptable as drunk driving.
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Original: Stpehen Harperhas proposed along with MADD Canada  to amend the Criminal Code to make high on drugs while driving just as unacceptable as drunk driving.
Revised: Stpehen Harperhas proposed along with MADD Canada to amend the Criminal Code to make driving while under the influence of drugs as unacceptable as drunk driving.
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Original:  Harper with MADD Canada tyed a red ribbon on the aerial of a vehicle as part of MADD's annual campaign targeting impaired driving during the holiday season.
Revised:  Harper with MADD Canada tied a red ribbon on the aerial of a vehicle as part of MADD's annual campaign targeting impaired driving during the holiday season.
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Original: Today one of the greatest R B singers of all time, Gerald Levert, son of Eddie Levert (of the soul group The O'Jays).
Revised:  B singers of all time, Gerald Levert, son of Eddie Levert (of the soul group The O'Jays).
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Original:  The memorial service for his death will be held Friday, November 17, and scheduled to honor Levert are Stevie Wonder, Johnny Gill and Angie Stone .
Revised:  The memorial service for his death will be held Friday, November 17, and scheduled to honor Levert are Stevie Wonder, Johnny Gill and Angie Stone 
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Original:  Levert was known for a number of top ten hits in the 1980s and 90s, particularly "Pop, Pop Goes My Mind", "Casanova", and ABC-123"
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Original: TV station, Seven, also showed their support as Mrs Emmett worked their as an actor , they said : "Our deepest sympathy is extended to Belinda's family who have supported her through this illness.
Revised: TV station, Seven, where Mrs Emmett worked their as an actor , they said : "Our deepest sympathy is extended to Belinda's family who have supported her through this illness.
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Original: TV station, Seven, also showed their support as Mrs Emmett worked their as an actor , they said : "Our deepest sympathy is extended to Belinda's family who have supported her through this illness.
Revised: TV station, Seven, also showed their support as Mrs Emmett worked as an actor , they said : "Our deepest sympathy is extended to Belinda's family who have supported her through this illness.
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Original: TV station, Seven, also showed their support as Mrs Emmett worked their as an actor , they said : "Our deepest sympathy is extended to Belinda's family who have supported her through this illness.
Revised: TV station, Seven, also showed their support as Mrs Emmett worked their as an actor also showed their support saying : "Our deepest sympathy is extended to Belinda's family who have supported her through this illness.
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Original:  Mrs Emmett's family said in a statement: "It is with great sadness we advise that Belinda Emmett's battle with cancer has ended."
Revised:  Ms Emmett's family said in a statement: "It is with great sadness we advise that Belinda Emmett's battle with cancer has ended."
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Original:  TV station, Seven, where Mrs Emmett worked as an actor also showed their support saying: "Our deepest sympathy is extended to Belinda's family who have supported her through this illness.
Revised:  TV station, Seven, where Ms Emmett worked as an actor also showed their support saying: "Our deepest sympathy is extended to Belinda's family who have supported her through this illness.
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Original:  The Australian Prime Minister, John Howard, said their family is saddened by the news of hearing that Mrs Emmett had passed away.
Revised:  The Australian Prime Minister, John Howard, said their family is saddened by the news of hearing that Ms Emmett had passed away.
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Original:  I have always considered Muslims as a part of Bahujan Sama
Revised:  I have always considered Muslims as a part of Bahujan Samaj
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Original: In addition to his daughter, Holly, Palance is survived by his second wife, Elaine Rogers Palance  ;
Revised:  Palance is survived by his second wife, Elaine Rogers Palance ;
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Original: In addition to his daughter, Holly, Palance is survived by his second wife, Elaine Rogers Palance  ;
Revised: In addition to his daughter, Holly, Palance is survived by his second wife, Elaine Rogers Palance ; his daughter, Holly ;
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Original:  A memorial service for him is planned for December 16 
Revised:  A memorial service for him is planned for December 16. 
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Original:  To break the record, the group successfully danced for five minutes non-stop ,
Revised:  To break the record, the group successfully danced for five minutes non-stop .
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Original: Starting at 5 am , nearly two-thousand Torontonians started gathering to kick up their heels.
Revised: Starting at 5 :00 a.m. , nearly two-thousand Torontonians started gathering to kick up their heels.
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Original:  Participant Jeanette Heller, 95 , is the oldest living Rockette.
Revised:  Participant Jeanette Heller, 95-years-old , is the oldest living Rockette.
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Original:   ]  To secure the  position, IEA calls for investment in energy-supply infrastructure of over $20 trillion in real terms over 2005-2030 to ensure that the World moves into a “Cleaner, Cleverer and More Competitive Energy Future
Revised:  nuclear power] To secure the position, IEA calls for investment in energy-supply infrastructure of over $20 trillion in real terms over 2005-2030 to ensure that the World moves into a “Cleaner, Cleverer and More Competitive Energy Future
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Original: These are among the findings of the “ World Energy Outlook – 2006 ” report by IEA published this week in London.
Revised: These are among the findings of the " World Energy Outlook – 2006 ” report by IEA published this week in London.
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Original: These are among the findings of the “ World Energy Outlook – 2006 ” report by IEA published this week in London.
Revised: These are among the findings of the “ World Energy Outlook – 2006 " report by IEA published this week in London.
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Original:  He said "We don't see how we can avoid [nuclear power] if we want a sustainable long-term future ".
Revised:  He said "We don't see how we can avoid [nuclear power] if we want a sustainable long-term future ."
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Original:  To secure the supply/demand position, IEA calls for investment in energy-supply infrastructure of over $20 trillion in real terms over 2005-2030 to ensure that the World moves into a “ Cleaner, Cleverer and More Competitive Energy Future 
Revised:  To secure the supply/demand position, IEA calls for investment in energy-supply infrastructure of over $20 trillion in real terms over 2005-2030 to ensure that the World moves into a " Cleaner, Cleverer and More Competitive Energy Future 
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Original:  To secure the supply/demand position, IEA calls for investment in energy-supply infrastructure of over $20 trillion in real terms over 2005-2030 to ensure that the World moves into a “ Cleaner, Cleverer and More Competitive Energy Future 
Revised:  To secure the supply/demand position, IEA calls for investment in energy-supply infrastructure of over $20 trillion in real terms over 2005-2030 to ensure that the World moves into a “ Cleaner, Cleverer and More Competitive Energy Future .
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Original:  The records were part of worldwide attempts, to commemmorate the second annual Guinness World Records Day.
Revised: According to the online encyclopedia Wikipedia, "the activity has been shown in episodes of Wildboyz, Celebrity Fit Club, Road Rules, The Amazing Race, and Globe Trekker, as well as the Jackie Chan film Armour of God II: Operation Condor." The records were part of worldwide attempts, to commemmorate the second annual Guinness World Records Day.
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Original:  Participant roll down slopes  , somewhat like hamster balls.
Revised:  Participants roll down slopes , somewhat like hamster balls.
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Original:  The makers of the Zorb product introduce the experience as a being "Where all your dreams are realized (as long as you dream of rolling down a hill inside a giant plastic ball)."
Revised:  The makers of the Zorb product introduce the experience as being "Where all your dreams are realized (as long as you dream of rolling down a hill inside a giant plastic ball)."
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Original:  Keith Rolver then set the speed record, rolling 50 kilometres per hour for a distance of 2.2km ;
Revised:  Keith Rolver then set the speed record, rolling 50 kilometres per hour ;
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Original:  In a November 2007 interview with Wikinews, The Onions Editorial Manager Chet Clem recounted an incident in which the reproduce a story from The Onion '' created in 2002, copied entirely verbatim, headlined "Congress threatens to leave DC unless new capitol is built".
Revised:  In a November 2007 interview with Wikinews, The Onions Editorial Manager Chet Clem recounted an incident in which the reproduce a story from The Onion created in 2002, copied entirely verbatim, headlined "Congress threatens to leave DC unless new capitol is built".
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Original:  In a November 2007 interview with Wikinews, The Onions Editorial Manager Chet Clem recounted an incident in which the reproduce a story from The Onion created in 2002, copied entirely verbatim, headlined "Congress threatens to leave DC unless new capitol is built".
Revised:  In a November 2007 interview with Wikinews, The Onions Editorial Manager Chet Clem recounted an incident in which the reproduced a story from The Onion created in 2002, copied entirely verbatim, headlined "Congress threatens to leave DC unless new capitol is built".
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Original:  A subsequent internal RCMP investigation found several instances of impropriety in the Arar case, including the provision of sensitive information on Arar to US officials, and that a liason officer may have known of the deportation plan but did not contact his supervisors.
Revised:  A subsequent internal RCMP investigation found several instances of impropriety in the Arar case, including the provision of sensitive information on Arar to US officials, and that a liaison officer may have known of the deportation plan but did not contact his supervisors.
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Original: Reports have surfaced that officials from North Korea may meet with officials from the United States in New York , New York to talk about the sanctions against North Korea and other problems between the two countries.
Revised: Reports have surfaced that officials from North Korea may meet with officials from the United States in New York City to talk about the sanctions against North Korea and other problems between the two countries.
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Original:  The storm is located on Saturn's southpole and this event has never occurred on another planet except for Earth.
Revised:  The storm is located on Saturn's south pole. This type of event has never occurred on another planet except for Earth.
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Original:  This type of event has never occurred on another planet except for Earth.
Revised:  This type of event has never been observed on another planet except for Earth.
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Original:  Bethe (pronounced Bey-ta) studied physics at Frankfurt and obtained his doctorate from the University of Munich.
Revised:  He studied physics at Frankfurt and obtained his doctorate from the University of Munich.
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Original:  He left Germany in 1933 when the Nazis came to power , moving first to England and in 1935 to the USA where he taught at Cornell University.
Revised:  He left Germany in 1933 when the Nazi Party came to power , moving first to England and in 1935 to the USA where he taught at Cornell University.
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Original: Bethe, whose mother was w: Jewish, fled Germany in 1933 when the Nazi Party came to power.
Revised: Bethe, whose mother was Jewish, fled Germany in 1933 when the Nazi Party came to power.
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Original: Hans Albrecht Bethe (pronounced Bey-ta ) was born on July 2, 1906 in the city of Strasbourg, then part of Germany (now part of France).
Revised: Hans Albrecht Bethe (pronounced Bay-ta ) was born on July 2, 1906 in the city of Strasbourg, then part of Germany (now part of France).
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