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Original:  U.S. news networks have reported  , according to unidentified intelligence officials, that the attack was carried out by unmanned drone aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
Revised:  U.S. news networks have reported , according to unidentified intelligence officials, the attack was carried out by unmanned drone aircraft which launched missiles at the target location.
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Original: However, today Ahmadinejad announced that Iran was lifting that ban.
Revised: However, today Ahmadinejad announced that Iran was lifting the ban.
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Original: Japanese whalers take on fuel - Greenpeace __NOTOC__ Anti-whaling protesters have joined forces across Australia, Canada, Germany, New Zealand, and the U.S.A calling for an end to the killing of whales for meat by Japan.
Revised:  __NOTOC__ Anti-whaling protesters have joined forces across Australia, Canada, Germany, New Zealand, and the U.S.A calling for an end to the killing of whales for meat by Japan.
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Original:  Greenpeace organised the international day of action as it continued its efforts to disrupt the hunting of minke whales by the Japanese whaling fleet currently in the Southern Ocean .
Revised:  Greenpeace organised the international day of action as it continued its efforts to disrupt the hunting of minke whales by the Japanese whaling fleet currently in the .
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Original:  The day of action was being marked to protest the actions of the fleet which protesters believe violate the 1986 International Whaling Commission (IWC) global ban on commercial whaling.
Revised:  The day of action was being marked to protest the actions of the fleet which protesters believe violate the 1986 (IWC) global ban on commercial whaling.
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Original:  In its JARPA-2 plan, Japan plans to double its annual scientific research catch of Minke whales to 935, and to add 10 Fin whales to its quota.
Revised:  In its JARPA-2 plan, Japan plans to double its annual scientific research catch of to 935, and to add 10 Fin whales to its quota.
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Original:  In its JARPA-2 plan, Japan plans to double its annual scientific research catch of Minke whales to 935, and to add 10 Fin whales to its quota.
Revised:  In its JARPA-2 plan, Japan plans to double its annual scientific research catch of Minke whales to 935, and to add 10 to its quota.
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Original:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare states that over the next two years, Japan plans to kill 50 endangered Humpback whales and an additional 40 fin whales.
Revised:  The states that over the next two years, Japan plans to kill 50 endangered Humpback whales and an additional 40 fin whales.
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Original:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare states that over the next two years, Japan plans to kill 50 endangered Humpback whales and an additional 40 fin whales.
Revised:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare states that over the next two years, Japan plans to kill 50 endangered and an additional 40 fin whales.
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Original:  At Sydney's Bondi Beach , anti-whaling campaigners asked bathers to sign a dozen metre-high cardboard whale tails placed in the sand and called for an end to whaling in the Southern Ocean.
Revised:  At Sydney's , anti-whaling campaigners asked bathers to sign a dozen metre-high cardboard whale tails placed in the sand and called for an end to whaling in the Southern Ocean.
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Original:  Japan abandoned commercial whaling in 1986, in line with an international moratorium, yet resumed whaling the following year for what it says is "scientific research".
Revised:  Japan abandoned in 1986, in line with an international moratorium, yet resumed whaling the following year for what it says is "scientific research".
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Original:  Japan's whaling program includes fin and humpback whales, both of which are on the World Conservation Union 's list of threatened species.
Revised:  Japan's whaling program includes fin and humpback whales, both of which are on the 's list of threatened species.
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Original:  The Institute of Cetacean Research in Tokyo accused Greenpeace of taking increasing risks in harassing the whaling fleet.
Revised:  The in Tokyo accused Greenpeace of taking increasing risks in harassing the whaling fleet.
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Original: The report 's findings are that articles two, three and eight of the Human Rights Act are frequently being breached.
Revised: The report says articles two, three and eight of the Human Rights Act are frequently being breached.
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Original: The report says articles two, three and eight of the Human Rights Act are frequently being breached.
Revised: The report says articles two, three and eight of the are frequently being breached.
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Original: The commissioned independent social report by The Arndale Centre conducted in-depth interviews with a cross-section of 40 randomly-selected elderly individuals receiving home care.
Revised: A commissioned independent social report by The Arndale Centre conducted in-depth interviews with a cross-section of 40 randomly-selected elderly individuals receiving home care.
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Original: A commissioned independent social report by The Arndale Centre conducted in-depth interviews with a cross-section of 40 randomly-selected elderly individuals receiving home care.
Revised: A commissioned independent social report by The Arndale Centre conducted in-depth interviews with a cross-section of 40 elderly individuals receiving home care.
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Original: The social isolation many elderly experience was summed up neatly by another woman in her eighties at the conclusion of her interview: "When you go now, I will maybe not talk to anybody till tomorrow;
Revised: The social isolation many elderly experience was summed up neatly by another woman in her eighties in her interview: "When you go now, I will maybe not talk to anybody till tomorrow;
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Original:  As  's from 1999 to January 2001, Summers shaped and pushed the financial deregulation that unleashed the near-collapse of Wall Street in the autumn of 2008, particularly when he pushed through the repeal of the of 1933 during the final years of the Clinton Administration — legislation, as you know, that had prohibited banks from doing both commercial and investment banking.
Revised:  As President Clinton 's from 1999 to January 2001, Summers shaped and pushed the financial deregulation that unleashed the near-collapse of Wall Street in the autumn of 2008, particularly when he pushed through the repeal of the of 1933 during the final years of the Clinton Administration — legislation, as you know, that had prohibited banks from doing both commercial and investment banking.
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Original:  Along with the video came a statement demanding the United States release all female prisoners in Iraq within 72 hours or they will kill Carroll . Al-Jazeera has not revealed where the video was sent from.
Revised:  Along with the video came a statement demanding the United States release all female prisoners in Iraq within 72 hours or they will kill her . Al-Jazeera has not revealed where the video was sent from.
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Original: Carroll's family have issued a statement pleading for mercy.
Revised: Carroll's family has issued a statement pleading for mercy.
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Original: Though he rarely involves himself in national politics, Bloomberg, who has served as Mayor of New York City since 2002, felt it necessary to speak about the failure of the twelve person super-committee, which Congress commissioned last summer at the president's urging as part of the .
Revised: Though he rarely involves himself in national politics, Bloomberg, who has served as Mayor of New York City since 2002, felt it necessary to discuss the failure of the twelve person super-committee, which Congress commissioned last summer at the president's urging as part of the .
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Original:  Former New York City Mayor believes an Independent like Bloomberg has a "major chance" of being elected in 2012, and hopes he will pursue this as his next act
Revised:  Former New York City Mayor believes an Independent like Bloomberg has a "major chance" of being elected in 2012, and hopes he pursues this as his next act
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Original: Though he rarely involves himself in national politics, Bloomberg , who has served as Mayor of New York City since 2002, felt it necessary to discuss the failure of the twelve person super-committee, which Congress commissioned last summer at the president's urging as part of the .
Revised: Though he rarely involves himself in national politics, Bloomberg felt it necessary to discuss the failure of the twelve person super-committee, which Congress commissioned last summer at the president's urging as part of the .
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Original: As winds in the UK reach 124 mph, a Spanish fishing trawler is missing off the coast of Scotland and three people have died in northern Britian .
Revised: As winds in the UK reach 124 mph, a Spanish fishing trawler is missing off the coast of Scotland and three people have died in northern Britain .
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Original:  The UK Coastguard recieved an emergency beacon signal via satellite at 2330 UTC last night from a boat in the North Atlantic, 180 miles west of Scotland.
Revised:  The UK Coastguard received an emergency beacon signal via satellite at 2330 UTC last night from a boat in the North Atlantic, 180 miles west of Scotland.
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Original:  No voice radio traffic had been recieved since the ship's owners talked to the captain at 2030, when the crew reported that they were in difficulties and were losing power.
Revised:  No voice radio traffic had been received since the ship's owners talked to the captain at 2030, when the crew reported that they were in difficulties and were losing power.
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Original:  In Scotland, the lorry fell on to a car, killing the driver.
Revised:  In Scotland, the lorry fell onto a car, killing the driver.
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Original:  A third person died in Scotland when a van was blown into the path of  on-coming lorry.
Revised:  A third person died in Scotland when a van was blown into the path of an on-coming lorry.
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Original:  Across Scotland, 60,000 people are without power, many road are blocked by fallen trees, trains are not running and ferries are restricted to port.
Revised:  Across Scotland, 60,000 people are without power, many roads are blocked by fallen trees, trains are not running and ferries are restricted to port.
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Original: The senate committe is to consider a private members bill, introduced by a group of female senators and MPs to strip the Australian heatlh minister of his control over the drug.
Revised: The senate committe is to consider a private members bill, introduced by a group of female senators and MPs to strip the Australian health minister of his control over the drug.
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Original:  This pill is available for use in France since 1988, in Suitzerland since 1999
Revised:  This pill has been available for use in France since 1988, in Suitzerland since 1999
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Original:  This pill is available for use in France since 1988, in Suitzerland since 1999
Revised:  This pill is available for use in France since 1988, in Switzerland since 1999
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Original: The senate committe is to consider a private members bill, introduced by a group of female senators and MPs to strip the Australian health minister of his control over the drug.
Revised: The senate committee is to consider a private members bill, introduced by a group of female senators and MPs to strip the Australian health minister of his control over the drug.
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Original:  If succesful the drug would then have to be approved by the Threrapeutic Goods Administration before it would be allowed to be used in Australia.
Revised:  If successful, the drug would then have to be approved by the Threrapeutic Goods Administration before it would be allowed to be used in Australia.
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Original:  This pill has been available for use in France since 1988, in Switzerland since 1999 
Revised:  This pill has been available for use in France since 1988, in Switzerland since 1999. 
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Original:  Federal and Queensland Government authorities are monitoring the situation  
Revised:  Federal and Queensland Government authorities are monitoring the situation . 
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Original:  According to Ballantine's campaign manager Cody J. Davis, Ballantine himself created the Wikipedia page.
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Original:  Images from the campaign trail Images from the November 2011 campaign trail, arranged chronologically:
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Original:  After standing its story for about 12 days CBS admited they could not confirm the authenticity of the documents and asked former attorney General Dick Thornburgh and former Associated Press President Louis Boccardi to start an independent investigation about the case .
Revised:  After standing its story for about 12 days CBS admited they could not confirm the authenticity of the documents and asked former attorney General Dick Thornburgh and former Associated Press President Louis Boccardi to start an independent investigation about it .
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Original:  CBS President Leslie Moonves said about the matter: " We deeply regret the disservice this flawed 60 Minutes Wednesday report did to the American public, which has a right to count on CBS News for fairness and accuracy ,"
Revised:  CBS President Leslie Moonves said about the matter: We deeply regret the disservice this flawed 60 Minutes Wednesday report did to the American public, which has a right to count on CBS News for fairness and accuracy ,"
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Original:  CBS President Leslie Moonves said about the matter: " We deeply regret the disservice this flawed 60 Minutes Wednesday report did to the American public, which has a right to count on CBS News for fairness and accuracy ,"
Revised:  CBS President Leslie Moonves said about the matter: " We deeply regret the disservice this flawed 60 Minutes Wednesday report did to the American public, which has a right to count on CBS News for fairness and accuracy .
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Original: CBS News dismissed 4 employees , including three executives, because of a untrustworthy story about President George W. Bush which was shown at September 8, 2004 in 60 Minutes Wednesday program .
Revised: CBS News dismissed 4 employees , including three executives, in the aftermath of an investigation into a faulty news story about President George W. Bush which was shown at September 8, 2004 in 60 Minutes Wednesday program .
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Original: CBS News dismissed 4 employees , including three executives, because of a untrustworthy story about President George W. Bush which was shown at September 8, 2004 in 60 Minutes Wednesday program .
Revised: CBS News dismissed 4 employees , including three executives, because of a untrustworthy story about President George W. Bush .
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Original:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
Revised:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president and overseer of CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
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Original:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
Revised:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
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Original:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
Revised:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard , 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
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Original:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
Revised:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
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Original:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
Revised:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy , senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
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Original:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
Revised:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
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Original:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes (program producer) .
Revised:  The discharged employees are: the senior vice president Betsy West(supervised CBS News primetime programs ) , Josh Howard ( 60 Minutes Wednesday executive producer ) , Mary Murphy ( senior broadcast producer ) and Mary Mapes , program producer .
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Original:  On September 8, 2004 CBS presented in 60 Minutes Wednesday program  a story about President George W. Bush Texas Air National Guard service during the Vietnam War.
Revised:  On Sept. 8, 2004 CBS presented in 60 Minutes Wednesday program a story about President George W. Bush Texas Air National Guard service during the Vietnam War.
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Original:  On September 8, 2004 CBS presented in 60 Minutes Wednesday program  a story about President George W. Bush Texas Air National Guard service during the Vietnam War.
Revised:  On September 8, 2004 CBS presented in 60 Minutes Wednesday program , a story about President George W. Bush Texas Air National Guard service during the Vietnam War.
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Original: The independent panel produced a 224 pages report which concluded that producers failed to follow basic journalistic principles , criticized their trust in documents reputedly fake and excess of confidence in preparation and reporting, not meeting the organization's standards.
Revised: The independent panel produced a 224 pages report which concluded that producers failed to follow basic journalistic principles when they made no attempt to verify their source's claims.
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Original:  References . . . .  See Also George W. Bush military service controver
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Original:  After standing its story for about 12 days CBS admited they could not confirm the authenticity of the documents and asked former attorney General Dick Thornburgh and former Associated Press President Louis Boccardi to start an independent investigation about it. category: Televisio 
Revised:  After standing its story for about 12 days CBS admitted they could not confirm the authenticity of the documents and asked former attorney General Dick Thornburgh and former Associated Press President Louis Boccardi to start an independent investigation about it. category: Televisio 
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Original:  After standing its story for about 12 days CBS admited they could not confirm the authenticity of the documents and asked former attorney General Dick Thornburgh and former Associated Press President Louis Boccardi to start an independent investigation about it. category: Televisio 
Revised:  After standing its story for about 12 days CBS admited they could not confirm the authenticity of the documents and asked former attorney General Dick Thornburgh and former Associated Press President Louis Boccardi to start an independent investigation about it. category: Television 
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Original: CBS President Leslie Moonves said about the matter:We deeply regret the disservice this flawed 60 Minutes Wednesday report did to the American public, which has a right to count on CBS News for fairness and accuracy .
Revised: CBS President Leslie Moonves said about the matter:We deeply regret the disservice this flawed 60 Minutes Wednesday report did to the American public, which has a right to count on CBS News for fairness and accuracy 
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Original:  References . . . . . See Also George W. Bush military service controversy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:January 10, 2005 Category:United States Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Published category:Television%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:George W. Bu
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Original:  References . . . . . See Also George W. Bush military service controversy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:January 10, 2005 Category:United States Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Published category:Television%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:George W. Bu
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Original:  References . . . . . See Also George W. Bush military service controversy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:January 10, 2005 Category:United States Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Published category:Television%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:George W. Bu
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