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Original: The plane was forced to land at Bermuda airport A drunk British passenger has forced a holiday jet to divert course after she became abusive to cabin crew.
Revised: The plane was forced to land at Bermuda airport An international holiday flight was diverted after a British passenger allegedly became abusive to cabin crew.
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Original:  The Boeing 767  owned by Thomson Airways  landed in Bermuda after the women assaulted a male flight attendant .
Revised:  The Boeing 767 , owned by Thomson Airways landed in Bermuda after the women assaulted a male flight attendant .
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Original:  The Boeing 767  owned by Thomson Airways  landed in Bermuda after the women assaulted a male flight attendant .
Revised:  The Boeing 767 owned by Thomson Airways , landed in Bermuda after the women assaulted a male flight attendant .
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Original:  The flight was heading to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic from Manchester Airport and was carrying 260 passengers .
Revised:  The flight was carrying 260 passengers to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic from Manchester Airport and was carrying 260 passengers .
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Original:  The flight was heading to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic from Manchester Airport and was carrying 260 passengers .
Revised:  The flight was heading to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic from Manchester Airport .
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Original:  She was handcuffed to her seat following an assault on one of the crew members , and remained restrained until the plane landed in Bermuda.
Revised:  She was handcuffed to her seat over the alleged assault , and remained restrained until the plane landed in Bermuda.
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Original:  She was handcuffed to her seat following an assault on one of the crew members , and remained restrained until the plane landed in Bermuda.
Revised:  She was handcuffed to her seat following an assault on one of the crew members , and remained thus until the plane landed in Bermuda.
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Original:  Thomson Airways released an official statement regarding the incident .
Revised:  Thomson Airways released a statement regarding the incident .
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Original:  According to The Sun newspaper , the 45-year-old women was drinking alcohol from a secret stash.
Revised:  According to The Sun , the 45-year-old women was drinking alcohol from a secret stash.
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Original:  she was handcuffed to her seat over the alleged assault , and remained thus until the plane landed in Bermuda . Brett Kenyon, 27, a passenger, said she was "shouting incoherently and lashing out at staff.
Revised:  she was handcuffed to her seat over the alleged assault . Brett Kenyon, 27, a passenger, said she was "shouting incoherently and lashing out at staff.
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Original:  she was handcuffed to her seat over the alleged assault , and remained thus until the plane landed in Bermuda . Brett Kenyon, 27, a passenger, said she was "shouting incoherently and lashing out at staff.
Revised:  she was handcuffed to her seat over the alleged assault , and remained thus until the plane landed in Bermuda . Brett Kenyon, 27, a passenger, said she was "shouting incoherently ...
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Original:  Thomson Airways released a statement regarding the incident saying the flight had diverted "following an incident involving a female passenger.
Revised:  Thomson Airways released a statement saying the flight had diverted "following an incident involving a female passenger.
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Original:  The flight was carrying 260 passengers to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic from Manchester Airport .
Revised:  The flight was carrying 260 passengers to in the Dominican Republic from Manchester Airport .
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Original:  The flight was carrying 260 passengers to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic from Manchester Airport .
Revised:  The flight was carrying 260 passengers to Punta Cana in the Dominican Republic from .
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Original:  According to The Sun , the 45-year-old women was drinking alcohol from a secret stash.
Revised:  According to , the 45-year-old women was drinking alcohol from a secret stash.
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Original:  Barta has been banned for six months after being caught driving with a fake licence plat 
Revised:  Barta has been banned for six months after being caught driving with a fake licence plate. 
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Original:  It has been reported that Barta does not plan to appeal the ba  
Revised:  It has been reported that Barta does not plan to appeal the ban. 
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Original:  He also said that he accepeted his punishmen
Revised:  He also said that he accepeted his punishment
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Original:  The prosecution denied Northumbria Police were seeking to offer their colleague an alternative to investigation, stating the allegation - made during Hedworth's closing speech - was untrue and the recording did not indicate an offer to drop the probe  
Revised:  The prosecution denied Northumbria Police were seeking to offer their colleague an alternative to investigation, stating the allegation - made during Hedworth's closing speech - was untrue and the recording did not indicate an offer to drop the probe . 
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Original: A jury in Newcastle Crown Court, northeast England has (cleared /convicted) a police officer of ( some charges in a trial over ) serial rapes and related offences  . Northumbria Police's PC Stephen Mitchell faced five counts of rape, six of indecent assault and 15 of misconduct in public office.
Revised: A jury in Newcastle Crown Court, northeast England has cleared a police officer of ( some charges in a trial over ) serial rapes and related offences . Northumbria Police's PC Stephen Mitchell faced five counts of rape, six of indecent assault and 15 of misconduct in public office.
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Original: A jury in Newcastle Crown Court, northeast England has (cleared /convicted) a police officer of ( some charges in a trial over ) serial rapes and related offences  . Northumbria Police's PC Stephen Mitchell faced five counts of rape, six of indecent assault and 15 of misconduct in public office.
Revised: A jury in Newcastle Crown Court, northeast England has (cleared /convicted) a police officer of some charges in a trial over ) serial rapes and related offences . Northumbria Police's PC Stephen Mitchell faced five counts of rape, six of indecent assault and 15 of misconduct in public office.
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Original: A jury in Newcastle Crown Court, northeast England has (cleared /convicted) a police officer of ( some charges in a trial over ) serial rapes and related offences  . Northumbria Police's PC Stephen Mitchell faced five counts of rape, six of indecent assault and 15 of misconduct in public office.
Revised: A jury in Newcastle Crown Court, northeast England has (cleared /convicted) a police officer of ( some charges in a trial over serial rapes and related offences . Northumbria Police's PC Stephen Mitchell faced five counts of rape, six of indecent assault and 15 of misconduct in public office.
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Original:  another indecent assault charge also produced an acquital   
Revised:  another indecent assault charge also produced an acquital . 
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Original:  She says although he asked to go at night to a hotel she refused, and ultimately she began ignoring his calls while he ceased supplying drugs  
Revised:  She says although he asked to go at night to a hotel she refused, and ultimately she began ignoring his calls while he ceased supplying drugs . 
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Original:  She says although he asked to go at night to a hotel she refused, and ultimately she began ignoring his calls while he ceased supplying drugs  
Revised:  She says although he asked to go at night to a hotel she refused, and ultimately she began ignoring his calls while he ceased supplying drugs Related new
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Original:  Today , the verdicts were delivered on the remaining charges.
Revised:  Yesterday , the verdicts were delivered on the remaining charges.
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Original:  The injured person was taken to the Saint Mary's Medical Center where he remains in critical condition according to city officials.
Revised:  The injured person was taken to the Saint Mary's Medical Center where they remain in critical condition according to city officials.
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Original:  Further details on the incident are not yet known
Revised:  The plane was flying a training flight from the Bahamas to Palm Beach and was returning to Melbourne when it crashed
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Original:  It is expected that Suu Kyi will be freed on Saturday when her arrest period expires   .
Revised:  It is expected that Suu Kyi will be freed on Saturday when her arrest period expires . .
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Original:  Security has been increase , though it is unclear whether it is in anticipation of Suu Kyi's release.
Revised:  Security has been increased , though it is unclear whether it is in anticipation of Suu Kyi's release.
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Original:  She has been held in house arrest numerous times in the last 20 years for trying relive Burma from military rule .
Revised:  She has been held in house arrest numerous times in the last 20 years .
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Original:  She has been held in house arrest numerous times in the last 20 years.
Revised:  She has been held under house arrest numerous times in the last 20 years.
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Original: left Reports say that Burmese military generals have signed the release papers of pro-democracy leader  ;
Revised:  Reports say that Burmese military generals have signed the release papers of pro-democracy leader ;
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Original:  In a 1981 memo, he wrote that abortion was the " the so-called right to privacy.
Revised:  In a 1981 memo, he wrote that abortion was the " settled law of the land
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Original:  Same with Brown v. Board of Education . " He promised legislators not to let his faith get in the way of his governing: " My faith and my religious beliefs do not play a role  . "  The interview went well for Republicans , who feel that Roberts has proven his mettle
Revised:  Same with Brown v. Board of Education . He promised legislators not to let his faith get in the way of his governing: " My faith and my religious beliefs do not play a role . " The interview went well for Republicans , who feel that Roberts has proven his mettle
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Original:  He did, however, reiterate his earlier statement that Roe v. Wade was the "settled law of the land", emphasizing the importance of consistent Supreme Court rulings.
Revised:  He did, however, reiterate his earlier statement that was the "settled law of the land", emphasizing the importance of consistent Supreme Court rulings.
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Original:  He also confirmed that he believed in the implied right to privacy which the Roe decision depended upon.
Revised:  He also confirmed that he believed in the implied which the Roe decision depended upon.
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Original:  Senator Jeff Sessions asked Roberts about his opinion of yesterday's California ruling against the use of the words "under God" in the Pledge of Alliegance , which is recited daily at most public schools.
Revised:  Senator Jeff Sessions asked Roberts about his opinion of yesterday's California ruling against the use of the words "under God" in the , which is recited daily at most public schools.
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Original:  Roberts noted that the Supreme Court has previously been inconsistent in its application of the establishment clause and that it should try to correct the situation, but didn't hint at his stance on the issue.
Revised:  Roberts noted that the Supreme Court has previously been inconsistent in its application of the and that it should try to correct the situation, but didn't hint at his stance on the issue.
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Original:  Senator Patrick Leahy inquired if Roberts believed the President had war powers allowing him to torture prisoners.
Revised:  Senator inquired if Roberts believed the President had war powers allowing him to torture prisoners.
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Original:  Convicted of possessing the bomb with intent to cause an explosion and endanger life in 2006, Gary Jones was granted a retrial on appeal  
Revised:  Convicted of possessing the bomb with intent to cause an explosion and endanger life in 2006, Gary Jones was granted a retrial on appeal . 
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Original:  the driver escaped despite being tackled by a witness, leaving behind his jumper      
Revised:  the driver escaped despite being tackled by a witness, leaving behind his jumper . 
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Original:  Mr Justice McCloskey said  "evidence does not point in a single direction.
Revised:  Mr Justice McCloskey said this "evidence does not point in a single direction.
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Original: Worcester Crown Court in England, UK has today jailed a policeman after abandoning two men unconscious on a freezing night, one of whom died.
Revised: Worcester Crown Court in England, UK has today jailed a policeman after he abandoned two men unconscious on a freezing night, one of whom died.
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Original:  David Driver of Gloucestershire Constabulary also lied about the state he found the pair in  
Revised:  David Driver of Gloucestershire Constabulary also lied about the state he found the pair in . 
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Original:  Ten minutes later, a member of the public found them and dialed the 999 emergency number   
Revised:  Ten minutes later, a member of the public found them and dialed the 999 emergency number . 
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Original:  The Independent Police Complaints Commission launched an investigation   
Revised:  The Independent Police Complaints Commission launched an investigation . 
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Original:  In February last year he discovered Steven Hathaway and another man apparently asleep in Bourton-on-the-Water, but failed to help them, whilst patroling in the early hours of the morning.
Revised:  In February last year he discovered Steven Hathaway and another man apparently asleep in Bourton-on-the-Water, but failed to help them, whilst patrolling in the early hours of the morning.
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Original:  He resigned upon admitting the offences  [   
Revised:  He resigned upon admitting the offences . [ 
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Original:  He resigned upon admitting the offences  [   
Revised:  He resigned upon admitting the offences [t 
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Original: In October, US District Judge Virginia Phillips ruled that "don't ask don't tell" violated gay people's rights to speak about their lives , and thus is a breach of their constitutional right to freedom of speech.
Revised: In October, US District Judge Virginia Phillips ruled that "don't ask don't tell" violated gay people's rights to speak about their lives it is a breach of their constitutional right to freedom of speech.
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Original:  An injunction was issued which forbade the Pentagon applying the policy, later nullified by an appeals court decision.
Revised:  She forbade by injunction any use of the policy, later nullified by an appeals court decision.
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Original:   In October, US District Judge Virginia Phillips ruled that since the policy prevented gays from talking about their lives it is a breach of their constitutional right to freedom of speech.
Revised:  200px In October, US District Judge Virginia Phillips ruled that since the policy prevented gays from talking about their lives it is a breach of their constitutional right to freedom of speech.
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Original:  200px In October, US District Judge Virginia Phillips ruled that since the policy prevented gays from talking about their lives it is a breach of their constitutional right to freedom of speech.
Revised:  In October, US District Judge Virginia Phillips ruled that since the policy prevented gays from talking about their lives it is a breach of their constitutional right to freedom of speech.
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Original: This allowed the policy to stay in place until the Obama administration had a chance to appeal the decision — While President Obama supports the lifting of the ban, he has made it clear that he would prefer the decision to be made by Congress, not the courts, which is why he wants the court verdicts struck down.
Revised: This allowed the policy to stay in place until the Obama administration had a chance to appeal the decision – While President Obama supports the lifting of the ban, he has made it clear that he would prefer the decision to be made by Congress, not the courts, which is why he wants the court verdicts struck down.
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Original:  It is also not permitted under the policy to inquire as to whether any member is homosexual — again, an offence for which someone can be dismissed.
Revised:  It is also not permitted under the policy to inquire as to whether any member is homosexual – again, an offence for which someone can be dismissed.
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Original:   Local bands included those formed at the Five Islands' School, the members of the Steamband under the temporary name Senile Shambles and the rhythm and blues band, Roadrunner.
Revised:  But will it be the last? Local bands included those formed at the Five Islands' School, the members of the Steamband under the temporary name Senile Shambles and the rhythm and blues band, Roadrunner.
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Original: But at night, the 11 children — all with conditions ranging from autism to fetal alcohol syndrome — were not treated like ordinary children, authorities say.
Revised: But at night, the 11 children were not treated like ordinary children, authorities say.
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Original: The suit, representing workers from six countries across four continents, conceals the identities of 17 workers from China, Bangladesh, Indonesia, Swaziland and Nicaragua in addition to four Californian workers cited as also representing others from the state.
Revised: The suit, representing workers from six countries across four continents, conceals the identities of 17 workers from China, Bangladesh, Indonesia, Swaziland and Nicaragua in addition to four Californians cited as also representing others from the state.
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Original:  The complaint accuses Wal-Mart of failing to adequately police garment suppliers and ensure that workers are not kept in sweatshop conditions,  that this is in breach of their own Code of Conduct for foreign suppliers.
Revised:  The complaint accuses Wal-Mart of failing to adequately police garment suppliers and ensure that workers are not kept in sweatshop conditions, and that this is in breach of their own Code of Conduct for foreign suppliers.
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Original:  This is part of an ongoing campaign against the business practices of Wal-Mart by the International Labour Rights Fund , a labour rights group opposed to many of the business practices of Wal-Mart which they claim encourage unacceptable working conditions and salaries in developing countries
Revised:  This is part of an ongoing campaign against Wal-Mart by the International Labour Rights Fund , a labour rights group opposed to many of the business practices of Wal-Mart which they claim encourage unacceptable working conditions and salaries in developing countries
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Original: A class-action suit has been filed with the Superior court of the state of California accusing Wal-Mart of failing to ensure their suppliers  employees work in acceptable conditions.
Revised: A class-action suit has been filed with the Superior court of the state of California accusing Wal-Mart of failing to ensure their suppliers ' employees work in acceptable conditions.
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Original:  Wal-Mart counters that they have an extensive programme to ensure suppliers adhere to their Code of Conduct , and that 200 full-time inspectors are employed to check supplier factories  and 108 factories have been permanently banned as suppliers , although this is mainly for child labour violations.
Revised:  Wal-Mart counters that they have an extensive programme to ensure suppliers adhere to their Code of Conduct ; that 200 full-time inspectors are employed to check supplier factories and 108 factories have been permanently banned as suppliers , although this is mainly for child labour violations.
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Original:  Wal-Mart counters that they have an extensive programme to ensure suppliers adhere to their Code of Conduct , and that 200 full-time inspectors are employed to check supplier factories  and 108 factories have been permanently banned as suppliers , although this is mainly for child labour violations.
Revised:  Wal-Mart counters that they have an extensive programme to ensure suppliers adhere to their Code of Conduct , and that 200 full-time inspectors are employed to check supplier factories , and 108 factories have been permanently banned as suppliers , although this is mainly for child labour violations.
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Original:  Wal-Mart counters that they have an extensive programme to ensure suppliers adhere to their Code of Conduct , and that 200 full-time inspectors are employed to check supplier factories  and 108 factories have been permanently banned as suppliers , although this is mainly for child labour violations.
Revised:  Wal-Mart counters that they have an extensive programme to ensure suppliers adhere to their Code of Conduct , and that 200 full-time inspectors are employed to check supplier factories and 108 factories have been permanently banned as suppliers . However, this is mainly for child labour violations.
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Original:  Wal-Mart counters that they have an extensive programme to ensure suppliers adhere to their Code of Conduct , and that 200 full-time inspectors are employed to check supplier factories  and 108 factories have been permanently banned as suppliers , although this is mainly for child labour violations.
Revised:  Wal-Mart counters that they have an extensive programme to ensure suppliers adhere to their Code of Conduct , and that 200 full-time inspectors are employed to check supplier factories and 108 factories have been permanently banned as suppliers , although this is mainly for child labor violations.
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Original:  This is part of an ongoing campaign against Wal-Mart by the International Labour Rights Fund , a labour rights group opposed to many of the business practices of Wal-Mart which they claim encourage unacceptable working conditions and salaries in developing countries
Revised:  This is part of an ongoing campaign against Wal-Mart by the International Labor Rights Fund ; a labor rights group opposed to many of the business practices of Wal-Mart which they claim encourage unacceptable working conditions and salaries in developing countries
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Original:  This is part of an ongoing campaign against Wal-Mart by the International Labour Rights Fund , a labour rights group opposed to many of the business practices of Wal-Mart which they claim encourage unacceptable working conditions and salaries in developing countries
Revised:  This is part of an ongoing campaign against Wal-Mart by the International Labour Rights Fund , a labour rights group opposed to many of the business practices of Wal-Mart that they claim encourage unacceptable working conditions and salaries in developing countries
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