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Original:  For example, in August 1850, when she was 16, she accompanied the Moby-Dick author Herman Melville and fellow writers Nathaniel Hawthorne and Oliver Wendell Holmes Sr. on a hike and picnic up Monument Mountain in Massachusetts, then joined them for dinner at her father’s summer home in Stockbridge in the URL The 1855 New York State Census shows her living in New York City with her father, her step-mother, and her elder brother, Dudley, along with six house servants.
Revised:  For example, in August 1850, when she was 16, she accompanied the Moby-Dick author Herman Melville and fellow writers Nathaniel Hawthorne and Oliver Wendell Holmes Sr. on a hike and picnic up Monument Mountain in Massachusetts, then joined them for dinner at her father’s summer home in Stockbridge in the evening. The 1855 New York State Census shows her living in New York City with her father, her step-mother, and her elder brother, Dudley, along with six house servants.
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Original: Tom's of Maine is a brand name and manufacturing company of personal care products with only natural ingredients and a URL subsidiary of Colgate-Palmolive since 2006.
Revised: Tom's of Maine is a f-ing name and manufacturing company of personal care products with only natural ingredients and a URL subsidiary of Colgate-Palmolive since 2006.
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Original: Tom's of Maine is a f-ing name and manufacturing company of personal care products with only natural ingredients and a URL subsidiary of Colgate-Palmolive since 2006.
Revised: Tom's of Maine is a brand name and manufacturing company of personal care products with only natural ingredients and a URL subsidiary of Colgate-Palmolive since 2006.
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Original: Tom's of Maine logo (until 2010) Tom's of Maine was founded by Tom and Kate Chappell in 1970 with US$5,000.
Revised: Tom's of Maine was founded by Tom and Kate Chappell in 1970 with US$5,000.
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Original: Tom's of Maine is a brand name and manufacturing company of personal care products with only natural ingredients and a URL subsidiary of Colgate-Palmolive since 2006.
Revised: Tom's of Maine is a brand name and manufacturing company of personal care products with only natural ingredients and a majority-owned subsidiary of Colgate-Palmolive since 2006.
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Original:  Lieutenant General Jannie Geldenhuys, Chief of the Army;
Revised:  Lieutenant General Johannes Geldenhuys, Chief of the Army;
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Original:  Mardavij grew up in an environment where memories of the glories of the Persian Empire were alive in the Iranian culture.
Revised:  Mardavij grew up in an environment where memories of the glories of the Iranian Empire were alive in the Iranian culture.
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Original:  Reign Persia in the mid-10th century In the same year, Makan managed to defeat Mardavij, and briefly recover Tabaristan.
Revised:  Reign Iran in the mid-10th century In the same year, Makan managed to defeat Mardavij, and briefly recover Tabaristan.
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Original: Backgrund Map of northern Iran Mardavij was born ca. in 890 in Gilan;
Revised: Background Map of northern Iran Mardavij was born ca. in 890 in Gilan;
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Original: Legacy Mardavij was one of the most notable figures in northern Iran known for preservating and advocating pre-Islamic Iranian customs.
Revised: Legacy Mardavij was one of the most notable figures in northern Iran known for preserving and advocating pre-Islamic Iranian customs.
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Original:  A higher prevalence of dementia in individuals with fewer years of education has suggested that education may protect against Alzheimer ’ s disease.
Revised:  A higher prevalence of dementia in individuals with fewer years of education has suggested that education may protect against Alzheimer ' s disease.
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Original:  Moreover, the level of education has a strong impact on adult ’ s lifestyle.
Revised:  Moreover, the level of education has a strong impact on adult ' s lifestyle.
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Original:  Studies suggest that occupation may provide additive and independent source of cognitive reserve throughout person ’ s life.
Revised:  Studies suggest that occupation may provide additive and independent source of cognitive reserve throughout person ' s life.
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Original:  Mortimer et al. performed cognitive testing on a population of 678 nuns in 1997, in which they showed that different levels of cognitive activity and performance were possible in patients diagnosed with Alzheimers .
Revised:  Mortimer et al. performed cognitive testing on a population of 678 nuns in 1997, in which they showed that different levels of cognitive activity and performance were possible in patients diagnosed with Alzheimer's .
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Original:  Findings to Lifestyle factors Cognitive and social activity: People with high leisure activity of intellectual (reading magazines or newspapers or books, playing cards, games or bingo, going to classes etc.), social (visiting or being visited by friends or relatives, etc.), engaging (helping others with daily tasks, paid work and volunteer work) nature have a significant smaller risk of developing dementia.
Revised:  Findings Cognitive and social activity: People with high leisure activity of intellectual (reading magazines or newspapers or books, playing cards, games or bingo, going to classes etc.), social (visiting or being visited by friends or relatives, etc.), engaging (helping others with daily tasks, paid work and volunteer work) nature have a significant smaller risk of developing dementia.
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Original:  Healthy Diet : Research on healthy diets emphasizes the benefits of adhering to the Mediterranean-style diet as protection of cognitive health.
Revised:  Healthy diet : Research on healthy diets emphasizes the benefits of adhering to the Mediterranean-style diet as protection of cognitive health.
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Original:  Previous investigation into Parkinson ’ s disease implicated a possible influence of cognitive reserve in the human brain.
Revised:  Previous investigation into Parkinson ' s disease implicated a possible influence of cognitive reserve in the human brain.
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Original:  This study shows that people choosing taxi driving as a career (one which has as a barrier to entry - the ability to memorize London's streets - described as "the world's most demanding test (of street knowledge)") have larger hippocampi, but does not demonstrate change in volume as a result of driving.
Revised:  This study shows that people choosing taxi driving as a career (one which has as a barrier to entry — the ability to memorize London's streets - described as "the world's most demanding test (of street knowledge)") have larger hippocampi, but does not demonstrate change in volume as a result of driving.
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Original:  This study shows that people choosing taxi driving as a career (one which has as a barrier to entry - the ability to memorize London's streets - described as "the world's most demanding test (of street knowledge)") have larger hippocampi, but does not demonstrate change in volume as a result of driving.
Revised:  This study shows that people choosing taxi driving as a career (one which has as a barrier to entry - the ability to memorize London's streets — described as "the world's most demanding test (of street knowledge)") have larger hippocampi, but does not demonstrate change in volume as a result of driving.
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Original: Lifestyle and Parkinson's disease Parkinson ’ s disease is an example for a condition which is associated with the role of cognitive reserve and cognitive impairment.
Revised:  Parkinson's disease Parkinson ’ s disease is an example for a condition which is associated with the role of cognitive reserve and cognitive impairment.
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Original: Lifestyle and Parkinson's disease Parkinson ’ s disease is an example for a condition which is associated with the role of cognitive reserve and cognitive impairment.
Revised: Lifestyle and Parkinson's disease Parkinson ' s disease is an example for a condition which is associated with the role of cognitive reserve and cognitive impairment.
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Original:  In these individuals and their carers early diagnosis might provide an opportunity to plan future care and to adjust to the diagnosis while they are still able to make decisions.
Revised:  In these individuals and their careers early diagnosis might provide an opportunity to plan future care and to adjust to the diagnosis while they are still able to make decisions.
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Original:  He confessed that Hammad Siddiqui  sought extortion and shares in the Baldia Factory, and upon refusal, he decided to punish them.
Revised:  He confessed that Hammad Siddiqui allegedly sought extortion and shares in the Baldia Factory, and upon refusal, he decided to punish them.
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Original: Hammad Siddiqui () is a  politician who served as the in-charge of Karachi Tanzeemi Committee (KTC) of Muttahida Qaumi Movement.
Revised: Hammad Siddiqui () is a Pakistani politician who served as the in-charge of Karachi Tanzeemi Committee (KTC) of Muttahida Qaumi Movement.
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Original:  Previously a central leader of the party's student body All Pakistan Muttahidda Students Organization , Spotlight on MQM 'Muscle body'.
Revised:  Previously a central leader of the party's student body All Pakistan Muttahidda Students Organization . Spotlight on MQM 'Muscle body'.
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Original:  Dawn Siddiqui became the head of the Karachi Tanzeemi Committee, a very important and influential body of MQM, in 2009, and kept the position for over four years.
Revised:  Dawn He became the head of the Karachi Tanzeemi Committee, a very important and influential body of MQM, in 2009, and kept the position for over four years.
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Original:  The party, which is the main secular political party in Pakistan, has its power centered in the largest city and ex-capital Karachi where it has won large number of national, provincial and local body seats  .
Revised:  The party, which is the main secular political party in Pakistan, had its power centered in the largest city and ex-capital Karachi where it has won large number of national, provincial and local body seats .
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Original: Rajagopalan Krishnan Vaidyan (17 November 1932 – 10 January 2015) was an Indian ayurvedic physician from the South Indian state of Kerala and the president of the Association of Ayurvedic Physicians of Kerala.
Revised: Rajagopalan Krishnan Vaidyan (17 November 1932 – 10 January 2015) was an Indian ayurvedic physician from the Indian state of Kerala and the president of the Association of Ayurvedic Physicians of Kerala.
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Original:   He was born in a family of traditional physicians to M. P. Krishnan Vaidyan and P. Kalyanikutty Amma, both practitioners of Ayurveda, and is a graduate of modern medicine (MBBS) and Ayurvedic medicine (DAM), which he passed with first rank from the Ayurveda College, Thiruvananthapuram.
Revised:  Early life and education He was born in a family of traditional physicians to M. P. Krishnan Vaidyan and P. Kalyanikutty Amma, both practitioners of Ayurveda, and is a graduate of modern medicine (MBBS) and Ayurvedic medicine (DAM), which he passed with first rank from the Ayurveda College, Thiruvananthapuram.
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Original:  He is  associated with many healthcare institutions in Kerala such as Amala Institute of Medical Sciences, Thrissur, Arya Vaidya Sala, Kottakkal, Ayurveda Pharmacy, Aluva and Ayurveda Samajam Hospitals, located at Thiruvananthapuram and Shornur, either as a consultant or as an advisor.
Revised:  He is Associations He was associated with many healthcare institutions in Kerala such as Amala Institute of Medical Sciences, Thrissur, Arya Vaidya Sala, Kottakkal, Ayurveda Pharmacy, Aluva and Ayurveda Samajam Hospitals, located at Thiruvananthapuram and Shornur, either as a consultant or as an advisor.
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Original:  He is an examiner of ayurvedic courses conducted by University of Kerala, Mahatma Gandhi University, University of Madras and Bharathiar University and works as the Dean of Sree Sankaracharya University of Sanskrit.
Revised:  He is an examiner of ayurvedic courses conducted by University of Kerala, Mahatma Gandhi University, University of Madras and Bharathiar University He also worked as the Dean of Sree Sankaracharya University of Sanskrit.
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Original:  He is also a member of the Central Council of Indian Medicine and an advisor on Indian medicine to the Government of Kerala.
Revised:  He is also a member of the Central Council of Indian Medicine He was an advisor on Indian medicine to the Government of Kerala.
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Original:   He is a recipient of Bhrihatrayee Ratna (1977) and Vaidya Vachaspati awards and has received the Fellowship from the Government of India.
Revised:  Awards He is a recipient of Bhrihatrayee Ratna (1977) and Vaidya Vachaspati awards and has received the Fellowship from the Government of India.
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Original: The Bale Revolt or the Bale Peasant Movement was a guerrilla war in the southeastern Ethiopian province of Bale led by the local Oromo and Somali population.
Revised: The Bale revolt or the Bale Peasant Movement was a guerrilla war in the southeastern Ethiopian province of Bale led by the local Oromo and Somali population.
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Original:  The revolt targeted the settlement of the Amhara people and feudalistic system in place in the Ethiopian Empire.
Revised:  The revolt targeted the colonial of the Amhara people and feudalistic system in place in the Ethiopian Empire.
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Original: Revolt The revolt is believed to have started as a result of many peasants in the southeastern region of Ethiopia, primarily composed of the Oromo people and Somali tribesmen, refusing to pay taxes and allow access to land to the Ethiopian  government.
Revised: Revolt The resistanse is believed to have started as a result of many peasants in the southeastern region of Ethiopia, primarily composed of the Oromo people and Somali tribesmen, refusing to pay taxes and allow access to land to the Ethiopian government.
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Original: Revolt The revolt is believed to have started as a result of many peasants in the southeastern region of Ethiopia, primarily composed of the Oromo people and Somali tribesmen, refusing to pay taxes and allow access to land to the Ethiopian  government.
Revised: Revolt The revolt is believed to have started as a result of many indigenous Bale in the southeastern region of Ethiopia, primarily composed of the Oromo people and Somali tribesmen, refusing to pay taxes and allow access to land to the Ethiopian government.
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Original:  The peasants also had strong opposition of the settlement of the Amhara people in Bale.
Revised:  The indigenous Bale people also had strong opposition of the settlement of the Amhara people in Bale.
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Original:  The revolt was led by Oromo leader and rebel figure Waqo Gutu and supported by the Somali government.
Revised:  The resistense was led by Oromo leader and rebel figure Waqo Gutu and supported by the Somali government.
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Original:   Waqo Gutu is believed to have started the rebellion when he received no government aid after a conflict over grazing rights.
Revised:  General Waqo Gutu is believed to have started the rebellion when he received no government aid after a conflict over grazing rights.
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Original:   Waqo Gutu is believed to have started the rebellion when he received no government aid after a conflict over grazing rights.
Revised:  Waqo Gutu is believed to have started the resistense when he received no government aid after a conflict over grazing rights.
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Original:  The battle of Dhombir at Malka Anna was critical in that the rebels were able to capture and take a lot of weapons from the enemy thereby boosting their defensive capabilities.
Revised:  The battle of Dhombir at Malka Anna was critical in that the Bale freedom fighters were able to capture and take a lot of weapons from the enemy thereby boosting their defensive capabilities.
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Original: The Bale revolt or the Bale Arsi Movement was a guerrilla war in the southeastern Ethiopian province of Bale led by the local Oromo and Somali population.
Revised: The Bale resistanse or the Bale Arsi Movement was a guerrilla war in the southeastern Ethiopian province of Bale led by the local Oromo and Somali population.
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Original:  The revolt targeted the colonial  of the Amhara people and feudalistic system in place in the Ethiopian Empire.
Revised:  The resistanse targeted the colonial of the Amhara people and feudalistic system in place in the Ethiopian Empire.
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Original:  The revolt targeted the colonial  of the Amhara people and feudalistic system in place in the Ethiopian Empire.
Revised:  The revolt targeted the colonial regime of the Amhara people and feudalistic system in place in the Ethiopian Empire.
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Original:  Memorial services conducted by Roland includes, Huang Na, Liu Hong Mei & Ah Meng, Singapore's national mascot . Early Life (Tong Aik Undertaker), 1947 to 2000 Born in 1947 as the fourth of 10 children to a hawker in a coffee shop along Lavender Street, Roland Tay began his working life as a coffee boy.
Revised:  Memorial services conducted by Roland includes, Huang Na, Liu Hong Mei & Ah Meng, Singapore's national mascot . Early Life Born in 1947 as the fourth of 10 children to a hawker in a coffee shop along Lavender Street, Roland Tay began his working life as a coffee boy.
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Original:   In the subsequent years, Tay started a few funeral companies including Tong Aik Undertaker which  is in charge of operating the Singapore Police Force's police hearse .
Revised:  Career In the subsequent years, Tay started a few funeral companies including Tong Aik Undertaker which is in charge of operating the Singapore Police Force's police hearse .
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Original:  Charitable Services (Direct Branding), 2000 to Present Direct Funeral Services achieved news prominence particularly in 2004 when Roland Tay conducted the pro-bono funeral of Huang Na, an eight-year-old girl who was murdered brutally in Pasir Panjang, Singapore.
Revised:  Charitable Services (Direct Branding), 2000 to Present Direct Funeral Services conducted the pro-bono funeral of Huang Na, an eight-year-old girl who was murdered brutally in Pasir Panjang, Singapore.
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Original:  Roland Tay reportedly collected around three hundred identity cards of deceased whom were without family and whom he conducted pro-bono funerals services.
Revised:  Tay reportedly collected around three hundred identity cards of deceased whom were without family and whom he conducted pro-bono funerals services.
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Original:  One of Roland Tay's more memorable cases is the pro-bono funeral he provided for the primate national mascot Ah Meng of Singapore.
Revised:  One of Tay's more memorable cases is the pro-bono funeral he provided for the primate national mascot Ah Meng of Singapore.
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Original:  One of Roland Tay's more memorable cases is the pro-bono funeral he provided for the primate national mascot Ah Meng of Singapore.
Revised:  One of Roland Tay's more memorable cases is the pro-bono funeral he provided for the primate tourism icon Ah Meng of Singapore.
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Original: Tao Construction Worker who fell to his death 10 February 2008 Ah Meng Death of Singapore 's Mascot Ah Meng 1 July 2009 Huang Rui Jing Unemployed Man has no money to mourn for sister 24 March 2010 Li Hong Yan Karaoke hostess from People's Republic of China drowned at Sentosa 13 May 2011 Alamin Bangladeshi worker who died while trapped in a container 1 Feb 2015 Ken Ong Murdered his wife Karen Koh before turning the same knife on himself at their Yuan Ching Road home References External links
Revised: Tao Construction Worker who fell to his death 10 February 2008 Ah Meng Death of Singapore tourism mascot, Ah Meng 1 July 2009 Huang Rui Jing Unemployed Man has no money to mourn for sister 24 March 2010 Li Hong Yan Karaoke hostess from People's Republic of China drowned at Sentosa 13 May 2011 Alamin Bangladeshi worker who died while trapped in a container 1 Feb 2015 Ken Ong Murdered his wife Karen Koh before turning the same knife on himself at their Yuan Ching Road home References External links
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Original: Tao Construction Worker who fell to his death 10 February 2008 Ah Meng Death of Singapore 's Mascot Ah Meng 1 July 2009 Huang Rui Jing Unemployed Man has no money to mourn for sister 24 March 2010 Li Hong Yan Karaoke hostess from People's Republic of China drowned at Sentosa 13 May 2011 Alamin Bangladeshi worker who died while trapped in a container 1 Feb 2015 Ken Ong Murdered his wife Karen Koh before turning the same knife on himself at their Yuan Ching Road home References External links
Revised: Tao Construction Worker who fell to his death 10 February 2008 Ah Meng Death of Singapore 's Mascot Ah Meng 1 July 2009 Huang Rui Jing Unemployed Man has no money to mourn for sister 24 March 2010 Li Hong Yan Karaoke hostess from China drowned at Sentosa 13 May 2011 Alamin Bangladeshi worker who died while trapped in a container 1 Feb 2015 Ken Ong Murdered his wife Karen Koh before turning the same knife on himself at their Yuan Ching Road home References External links
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Original: Early Life Born in 1947 as the fourth of 10 children to a hawker in a coffee shop along Lavender Street, Roland Tay began his working life as a coffee boy  .
Revised: Early Life Born in 1947 as the fourth of 10 children to a hawker in a coffee shop along Lavender Street, Tay began his working life as a coffee boy .
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Original: Early Life Born in 1947 as the fourth of 10 children to a hawker in a coffee shop along Lavender Street, Roland Tay began his working life as a coffee boy  .
Revised: Early Life Born in 1947 as the fourth of 10 children to a hawker in a coffee shop along Lavender Street, Roland Tay began his working life as a coffee boy at his family's coffee shop .
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Original:  He learned about the funeral trade as a result, thus when his father passed on  , Tay converted his father's coffee shop into the now defunct Casket Palace, which was  bought over by Singapore Casket.
Revised:  He learned about the funeral trade . , Tay converted his father's coffee shop into the now defunct Casket Palace, which was bought over by Singapore Casket.
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Original:  He learned about the funeral trade as a result, thus when his father passed on  , Tay converted his father's coffee shop into the now defunct Casket Palace, which was  bought over by Singapore Casket.
Revised:  He learned about the funeral trade as a result, thus when his father passed on , Tay converted the coffee shop into the now defunct Casket Palace, which was bought over by Singapore Casket.
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Original:  He learned about the funeral trade as a result, thus when his father passed on  , Tay converted his father's coffee shop into the now defunct Casket Palace, which was  bought over by Singapore Casket.
Revised:  He learned about the funeral trade as a result, thus when his father passed on , Tay converted his father's coffee shop into Casket Palace, which was bought over by Singapore Casket.
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Original:  He learned about the funeral trade as a result, thus when his father passed on  , Tay converted his father's coffee shop into the now defunct Casket Palace, which was  bought over by Singapore Casket.
Revised:  He learned about the funeral trade as a result, thus when his father passed on , Tay converted his father's coffee shop into the now defunct Casket Palace, which was subsequently bought over by Singapore Casket.
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