wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Second conquest of Egypt [[File:HibisGate3Dareios1AmunRaKamutef.jpg|upRelief showing Darius I offering lettuces to the Egyptian deity Amun-Ra Kamutef, Temple of Hibis]] [[File:Darius I statue list of subject countries.jpg|upThe 24 countries subject to the Achaemenid Empire at the time of Darius, on the Egyptian Statue of Darius I.]] The reduction of Sidon was followed closely by the invasion of Egypt.
Revised: Second conquest of Egypt [[File:HibisGate3Dareios1AmunRaKamutef.jpg|upRelief showing Darius I offering lettuces to the Egyptian deity Amun-Ra Kamutef, Temple of Hibis]] [[File:Darius I statue list of subject countries.jpg|upThe 24 countries subject to the Achaemenid Empire at the time of Darius, on the Egyptian statue of Darius I.]] The reduction of Sidon was followed closely by the invasion of Egypt.
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Original:  New usage of the term "Ate-u-Tiv" may refers to a meeting place, social network or forum.
Revised:  New usage of the term "Ate-u-Tiv" may refer to a meeting place, social network or forum.
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Original:  The word " Ate " stands for the round, open hut;
Revised:  The word " Atē " stands for the round, open hut;
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Original:  while " Ate-u-Tiv " attributes it to the Tiv people.
Revised:  while " Átē-ŭ-Tiv " attributes it to the Tiv people.
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Original: right " Ate-u-Tiv " (sometimes written as "Ate u Tiv" and less popularly known as "Tsun") is a traditional architectural masterpiece of the Tiv People of the Middle-belt Region of Nigeria in West Africa.
Revised:  " Ate-u-Tiv " (sometimes written as "Ate u Tiv" and less popularly known as "Tsun") is a traditional architectural masterpiece of the Tiv People of the Middle-belt Region of Nigeria in West Africa.
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Original: right " Ate-u-Tiv " (sometimes written as "Ate u Tiv" and less popularly known as "Tsun") is a traditional architectural masterpiece of the Tiv People of the Middle-belt Region of Nigeria in West Africa.
Revised: right Ate-u-Tiv " (sometimes written as "Ate u Tiv" and less popularly known as "Tsun") is a traditional architectural masterpiece of the Tiv People of the Middle-belt Region of Nigeria in West Africa.
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Original: right " Ate-u-Tiv " (sometimes written as "Ate u Tiv" and less popularly known as "Tsun") is a traditional architectural masterpiece of the Tiv People of the Middle-belt Region of Nigeria in West Africa.
Revised: right " Ate-u-Tiv (sometimes written as "Ate u Tiv" and less popularly known as "Tsun") is a traditional architectural masterpiece of the Tiv People of the Middle-belt Region of Nigeria in West Africa.
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Original:   To construct a traditional Ate-u-Tiv , you will require a minimum of six poles called "mtôm" which are y-shaped at the top;
Revised:  A traditional Ate-u-Tiv , you will require a minimum of six poles called "mtôm" which are y-shaped at the top;
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Original:   To construct a traditional Ate-u-Tiv , you will require a minimum of six poles called "mtôm" which are y-shaped at the top;
Revised:  To construct a traditional Ate-u-Tiv is supported by a minimum of six poles called "mtôm" which are y-shaped at the top;
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Original:  The total number of poles required will however depend on the diameter of the Ate to be constructed.
Revised:  The total number of poles depends on the diameter of the Ate to be constructed.
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Original:  These are erected upright into the ground in a circle with equal spacing between poles.
Revised:  These are erected upright in a circle with equal spacing between poles.
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Original:  Next is "ukyaver" which comprise stems of slim climbing plants .
Revised:  Next is "ukyaver" , stems of slim climbing plants .
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Original:  New usage of the term "Ate-u-Tiv" may refer to a meeting place, social network or forum .
Revised:  New usage of the term "Ate-u-Tiv" may refer to a meeting place, social network or forum 
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Original:  The term has been used in a variety of contexts and may be used to refer to objects that have been developed with human intelligence, such as robots or vehicles.
Revised:  The term has been used in a variety of contexts and may refer to objects that have been developed with human intelligence, such as robots or vehicles.
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Original:    ][ Artificial intelligence The term non-human has been used to describe computer programs and robot-like devices that display some human-like characteristics.
Revised:  1][ Artificial intelligence The term non-human has been used to describe computer programs and robot-like devices that display some human-like characteristics.
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Original: thumb On December 18, 2014, Sandra was termed by the court in Argentina as a "subject of rights" in an unsuccessful habeas corpus case regarding the release of the orangutan from captivity at the Buenos Aires zoo.
Revised:  On December 18, 2014, Sandra was termed by the court in Argentina as a "subject of rights" in an unsuccessful habeas corpus case regarding the release of the orangutan from captivity at the Buenos Aires zoo.
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Original: The Moon Griffon Show, February 17, 2011 Records also reveal that Granger contributed to two Republican candidates from his area, former State Senator Craig Romero and former U.S. Representative Jeff Landry, the curretn state attorney general, both of New Iberia.
Revised: The Moon Griffon Show, February 17, 2011 Records also reveal that Granger contributed to two Republican candidates from his area, former State Senator Craig Romero and former U.S. Representative Jeff Landry, the current state attorney general, both of New Iberia.
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Original: In April 2018, Perry was one of ten senators who voted against criminalizing sexual abuse of animals.
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Original: Louisiana lawyers Category:Louisiana state court judges Category:Circuit court judges in the United States Category:Louisiana Republicans Category:Louisiana state senators Category:Members of the Louisiana House of Representatives Category:People from Kaplan, Louisiana Category:University of Louisiana at Monroe alumni Category:Southern University Law Center alumni Category:21st-century American politicians Category:Catholics from Louisiana Category:21st-century American comedia
Revised: Louisiana lawyers Category:Louisiana state court judges Category:Circuit court judges in the United States Category:Louisiana Republicans Category:Louisiana state senators Category:Members of the Louisiana House of Representatives Category:People from Kaplan, Louisiana Category:University of Louisiana at Monroe alumni Category:Southern University Law Center alumni Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American comedia
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Original:  Perry ran unopposed for the judgeship in the November 6, 2018 primary election, held in conjunction with general elections for Congress in the forty-nine other states, Perry assumes the post on January 1, 2019.
Revised:  Perry ran unopposed for the judgeship in the November 6, 2018 primary election, held in conjunction with general elections for Congress in the forty-nine other states, Perry assumed the post on January 1, 2019.
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Original:  Perry ran unopposed for the judgeship in the November 6, 2018 primary election, held in conjunction with general elections for Congress in the forty-nine other states , Perry assumed the post on January 1, 2019.
Revised:  Perry ran unopposed for the judgeship in the November 6, 2018 primary election, held in conjunction with general elections for Congress in the forty-nine other states . Perry assumed the post on January 1, 2019.
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Original: Senatorial humorists Stand-up comic Perry is not the only Louisiana state senator known for his humor and theatrics.
Revised:  Stand-up comic Perry is not the only Louisiana state senator known for his humor and theatrics.
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Original: The Moon Griffon Show, February 17, 2011.
Revised: The Moon Griffon Show, February 17, 2011
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Original:  The structure is found in modern-day Rwanda, Burundi, Tanzania and Ugand 
Revised:  The structure is found in modern-day Rwanda, Burundi, Tanzania and Uganda. 
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Original: In the African Great Lakes region, the clan is a unit of social organisation.
Revised: mn the African Great Lakes region, the clan is a unit of social organisation.
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Original: mn the African Great Lakes region, the clan is a unit of social organisation.
Revised: in the African Great Lakes region, the clan is a unit of social organisation.
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Original: in the African Great Lakes region, the clan is a unit of social organisation.
Revised: In the African Great Lakes region, the clan is a unit of social organisation.
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Original:  During this period, Smuts further solidifed his political alliance and personal friendship with Louis Botha.
Revised:  During this period, Smuts further solidified his political alliance and personal friendship with Louis Botha.
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Original:  He served as a Boer General during the Boer War, a British General during the First World War and was appointed Field Marshal during the Second World War . In addition to various Cabinet appointments, he served as Prime Minister of the Union of South Africa from 1919 to 1924 and from 1939 to 1948.
Revised:  He served as a Boer General during the Boer War, a British General during the First World War and was appointed Field Marshal during World War II . In addition to various Cabinet appointments, he served as Prime Minister of the Union of South Africa from 1919 to 1924 and from 1939 to 1948.
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Original:  This article is about Jan Smuts as a minister in the government of Louis Botha, from the creation of the Union of South Africa in 1910 until the outbreak of the First World War in 1914.
Revised:  This article is about Jan Smuts as a minister in the government of Louis Botha, from the creation of the Union of South Africa in 1910 until the outbreak of World War I in 1914.
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Original:  The breakdown of government control, and the descent towards civil war, was only further prevented by the advent of the First World War . During this period, Smuts further solidified his political alliance and personal friendship with Louis Botha.
Revised:  The breakdown of government control, and the descent towards civil war, was only further prevented by the advent of World War I . During this period, Smuts further solidified his political alliance and personal friendship with Louis Botha.
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Original:  With the outbreak of the First World War South Africa along with the other British Dominions fought on the side of the British Empire.
Revised:  With the outbreak of World War I South Africa along with the other British Dominions fought on the side of the British Empire.
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Original: Jan Christian Smuts, OM ( May 24 , 1870 – September 11 , 1950) was a prominent South African and Commonwealth statesman and military leader.
Revised: Jan Christian Smuts, OM ( 24 , 1870 – September 11 , 1950) was a prominent South African and Commonwealth statesman and military leader.
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Original: Jan Christian Smuts, OM ( May 24 , 1870 – September 11 , 1950) was a prominent South African and Commonwealth statesman and military leader.
Revised: Jan Christian Smuts, OM ( May 24 , 1870 – 11 , 1950) was a prominent South African and Commonwealth statesman and military leader.
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Original:  A mass meeting was scheduled for July 4  in Johannesburg, but, at the last minute, Smuts refused it permission.
Revised:  A mass meeting was scheduled for 4 in Johannesburg, but, at the last minute, Smuts refused it permission.
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Original:  On January 13  , they did, by calling a general strike.
Revised:  On 13 , they did, by calling a general strike.
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Original:  De la Rey reached his position on January 18  , and, without any means of defending themselves, the union chiefs surrendered.
Revised:  De la Rey reached his position on 18 , and, without any means of defending themselves, the union chiefs surrendered.
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Original:  On January 27  , Smuts took nine of the leaders from their prison cells, and ordered them to be deported, without warrant or trial.
Revised:  On 27 , Smuts took nine of the leaders from their prison cells, and ordered them to be deported, without warrant or trial.
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Original: Jockeying for position Construction begins Smuts and Botha take control The Hatter's Tea Party Perhaps more importantly, they resented the union of the ministries for Finance and Defence: two ministries that were usually at each others throats over funding and necessity.
Revised: Jockeying for position Construction begins Smuts and Botha take control The Hatter's Tea Party Perhaps more importantly, they resented the union of the ministries for Finance and Defence: two ministries that were usually at each other's throats over funding and necessity.
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Original:  500px|Photo version of Spot the Difference puzzle.
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Original:  The solution to the puzzle is often listed nearby or in an accompanying answer page of a puzzle book.
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Original: Mohamed Mouldi Kefi (born February 10, 1946 in Le Kef, Tunisia) is the Minister of Foreign Affairs of Tunisia and a retired diplomat.
Revised: Mohamed Mouldi Kefi (born February 10, 1946 in Le Kef, Tunisia) was the Minister of Foreign Affairs of Tunisia and a retired diplomat.
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Original: Cyprien Ntaryamira (6 March 1955 – 6 April 1994) was a Burundian politician who served as President of Burundi from 5 February 1994 until his death two months later.
Revised: Cyprien Ntaryamira (6 March 1958 – 6 April 1994) was a Burundian politician who served as President of Burundi from 5 February 1994 until his death two months later.
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Original:  During his tenure the government attempted to use the army to demobilise civilian militias, but in late March the army became entangled in ethnic conflict in the capital and, acting autonomously from the government, exclusively targeted Hutu neighborhoods for disarmament.
Revised:  During his tenure the government attempted to use the army to stop the militias, but in late March the army became entangled in ethnic conflict in the capital and, acting autonomously from the government, exclusively targeted Hutu neighborhoods for disarmament.
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Original:   On 4 April he met with Mobutu and Rwandan President Juvénal Habyarimana in Gbadolite to discuss regional security issues.
Revised:  On 4 April he met with Mobutu and Habyarimana in Gbadolite to discuss regional security issues.
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Original:   Thousands of Hutus fled Burundi, including Ntaryamira , who went to Rwanda.
Revised:  Thousands of Hutus ultimately fled the country. Ntaryamira eventually went to Rwanda.
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Original: Different studies revealed a different predisposition for the presence of septa based on sinus region: Anterior: Ulm, et al., Krennmair et al.
Revised: Different studies reveal a different predisposition for the presence of septa based on sinus region: Anterior: Ulm, et al., Krennmair et al.
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Original:  Sinus pneumatization is a poorly understood phenomenon that results in an increased volume of the maxillary sinus, generally following maxillary posterior tooth loss, at the expense of that bone which used to house the roots of the maxillary posterior teeth.
Revised:  Sinus pneumatization is a poorly understood phenomenon that results in an increased volume of the maxillary sinus, generally following maxillary posterior tooth loss, at the expense of the bone which used to house the roots of the maxillary posterior teeth.
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Original: Reindorf was born in Prampram, Gold Coast, a palm oil trading port He was the only son of Carl Christian Reindorf Hackenburg (1806 - 1865), a soldier of half-Danish heritage, and Hannah Anowah Ama Cudjoe Reindorf (1811 -1902), an ethnic Ga from Kinka, Dutch Accra.
Revised: Reindorf was born in Prampram, Gold Coast, a palm oil trading port He was the only son of Carl Christian Reindorf Hackenburg (1806 – 1865), a soldier of half-Danish heritage, and Hannah Anowah Ama Cudjoe Reindorf (1811 -1902), an ethnic Ga from Kinka, Dutch Accra.
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Original:  In appreciation of his medical services in treating the wounded after the Ga-Akwamu war, he was the recipient of a citation of commendation from the Administrator ( 1867-1872 ) and later Governor (1879 -1880), H. T. Ussher during the welcome ceremonies for a visiting contingent from Lagos, Nigeria.
Revised:  In appreciation of his medical services in treating the wounded after the Ga-Akwamu war, he was the recipient of a citation of commendation from the Administrator ( 1867–1872 ) and later Governor (1879 -1880), H. T. Ussher during the welcome ceremonies for a visiting contingent from Lagos, Nigeria.
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Original:  The chiefs and people of Osu accorded him a "full state funeral" with "the attendance reported as being the largest seen in Accra for many years" At the church service, six Basel Mission pastors, including his fellow native Ga ministers, Jeremias Engmann ( 1840-20 ), W. A. Quartey who was later elected the third Moderator of the Presbyterian Church of the Gold Coast from 1925 to 1929 as well as Ludwig L. Richter and Samuel Wuta Ofei ( 1850-22 ) delivered eulogies.
Revised:  The chiefs and people of Osu accorded him a "full state funeral" with "the attendance reported as being the largest seen in Accra for many years" At the church service, six Basel Mission pastors, including his fellow native Ga ministers, Jeremias Engmann ( 1840–20 ), W. A. Quartey who was later elected the third Moderator of the Presbyterian Church of the Gold Coast from 1925 to 1929 as well as Ludwig L. Richter and Samuel Wuta Ofei ( 1850-22 ) delivered eulogies.
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Original:  The chiefs and people of Osu accorded him a "full state funeral" with "the attendance reported as being the largest seen in Accra for many years" At the church service, six Basel Mission pastors, including his fellow native Ga ministers, Jeremias Engmann ( 1840-20 ), W. A. Quartey who was later elected the third Moderator of the Presbyterian Church of the Gold Coast from 1925 to 1929 as well as Ludwig L. Richter and Samuel Wuta Ofei ( 1850-22 ) delivered eulogies.
Revised:  The chiefs and people of Osu accorded him a "full state funeral" with "the attendance reported as being the largest seen in Accra for many years" At the church service, six Basel Mission pastors, including his fellow native Ga ministers, Jeremias Engmann ( 1840-20 ), W. A. Quartey who was later elected the third Moderator of the Presbyterian Church of the Gold Coast from 1925 to 1929 as well as Ludwig L. Richter and Samuel Wuta Ofei ( 1850–22 ) delivered eulogies.
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Original: Ghanaian Protestants Category:Ghanaian people of Danish descent Category:Ghanaian clergy Category:Ghanaian educators Category:Ghanaian historians Category:Ghanaian missionaries Category:Ghanaian theologians Category:Heads of schools in Ghana Category:People from Accra Category:19th-century Presbyterian ministers Category:20th-century Presbyterian ministers Category:Presbyterian College of Education, Akropong faculty Category:Osu Salem School alumni Category:Osu Salem School teaching sta
Revised: Ghanaian Protestants Category:Ghanaian people of Danish descent Category:Ghanaian clergy Category:Ghanaian educators Category:Ghanaian historians Category:Ghanaian theologians Category:Heads of schools in Ghana Category:People from Accra Category:19th-century Presbyterian ministers Category:20th-century Presbyterian ministers Category:Presbyterian College of Education, Akropong faculty Category:Osu Salem School alumni Category:Osu Salem School teaching sta
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Original: Ghanaian Protestants Category:Ghanaian people of Danish descent Category:Ghanaian clergy Category:Ghanaian educators Category:Ghanaian historians Category:Ghanaian missionaries Category:Ghanaian theologians Category:Heads of schools in Ghana Category:People from Accra Category:19th-century Presbyterian ministers Category:20th-century Presbyterian ministers Category:Presbyterian College of Education, Akropong faculty Category:Osu Salem School alumni Category:Osu Salem School teaching sta
Revised: Ghanaian Protestants Category:Ghanaian people of Danish descent Category:Ghanaian clergy Category:Ghanaian educators Category:Ghanaian historians Category:Ghanaian missionaries Category:Ghanaian theologians Category:Heads of schools in Ghana Category:People from Accra Category:19th-century Presbyterian ministers Category:20th-century Presbyterian ministers Category:Presbyterian College of Education, Akropong faculty Category:Osu Salem School alumni Category:Osu Salem School teaching staff Category:Presbyterian missionaries in Gha
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Original:  Analysis  Cultural Consensus analyses may be performed with software applications.
Revised:  Analysis When used as a method for analysis, the cultural consensus theory allows the following: the determination whether the observed variability in knowledge is cultural; the measurement of cultural competence that each individual possesses; and, the determination of culturally correct knowledge. Cultural Consensus analyses may be performed with software applications.
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Original:  When  agreement is close to absolute, estimating answers is straightforward.
Revised:  When an agreement is close to absolute, estimating answers is straightforward.
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Original:  A high degree of agreement among raters must be present in responses in order to use consensus theory – only with high agreement does it make sense to aggregate responses to estimate beliefs of the group.
Revised:  A high degree of agreement among raters must be present in responses to use consensus theory – only with high agreement does it make sense to aggregate responses to estimate beliefs of the group.
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Original:  Cultural consensus theory is able to estimate competence from the agreement between subjects and then, answers are estimated by “weighting” individual responses by competence prior to aggregation.
Revised:  Cultural consensus theory can estimate competence from the agreement between subjects and then, answers are estimated by “weighting” individual responses by competence prior to aggregation.
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Original:  In this case,  accuracy of aggregated responses can be calculated from the number of subjects and the average Pearson correlation coefficient between all pairs of subjects (across questions).
Revised:  In this case, the accuracy of aggregated responses can be calculated from the number of subjects and the average Pearson correlation coefficient between all pairs of subjects (across questions).
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Original:  In the formal model,  similarity is the probability that matched responses occur (match method. or the probability of particular response combinations occur (covariance method).
Revised:  In the formal model, the similarity is the probability that matched responses occur (match method. or the probability of particular response combinations occur (covariance method).
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Original:  A formal model is based on the decision-making process model of how questions are answered (with parameters for competence, response bias  and guessing).
Revised:  A formal model is based on the decision-making process model of how questions are answered (with parameters for competence, response bias , and guessing).
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Original: Babylon In Babylon , around the 1700s BC , the law that applied was King Hammurabi's Code .
Revised: France In France , around the 1700s BC , the law that applied was King Hammurabi's Code .
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