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Original: George Michael Steinbrenner III, businessman and owner and former principal executive of the New York Yankees, died at 6:30 a.m. EDT (1030 UTC) today of a massive heart attack at St. Joseph's Hospital in Tampa, Florida, at age 80.
Revised: George Michael Steinbrenner III, businessman , owner, and former principal executive of the New York Yankees, died at 6:30 a.m. EDT (1030 UTC) today of a massive heart attack at St. Joseph's Hospital in Tampa, Florida, at age 80.
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Original:  Deputy Chief Pat Gannon told the Los Angeles Times that Chavez has a history of metal health problems.
Revised:  Deputy Chief Pat Gannon told the Los Angeles Times that Chavez has a history of mental health problems.
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Original:  The mother remains in the hospital in stable condition . Chavez appeared in court for a hearing Tuesday morning
Revised:  The mother remains in the hospital in stable condition Chavez appeared in court for a hearing Tuesday morning
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Original:  ]] The Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged with murder a woman Friday after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the Air Force base Fort MacArthur residential facility in San Pedro, California.
Revised:  ]] On Friday, the Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged with murder a woman Friday after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the Air Force base Fort MacArthur residential facility in San Pedro, California.
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Original:  ]] The Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged with murder a woman Friday after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the Air Force base Fort MacArthur residential facility in San Pedro, California.
Revised:  ]] The Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged with murder a woman , after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the Air Force base Fort MacArthur residential facility in San Pedro, California.
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Original:  The girl's father is a former member of the military .
Revised:  The girl's father is a former member of the Navy .
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Original:  ]]On Friday, the Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged with murder a woman , after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the Air Force base Fort MacArthur residential facility in San Pedro, California.
Revised:  ]]On Friday, the Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged a woman with murder , after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the Air Force base Fort MacArthur residential facility in San Pedro, California.
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Original:  The daughter, Quesi Chavez, later died at the University of Southern California's Medical Center due to her wounds.
Revised:  The daughter, Quesi Chavez, later died at the University of Southern California's Medical Center as a result of her wounds.
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Original:  As of Monday, the mother remained in  hospital in stable condition, but was scheduled to appear in court yesterday
Revised:  As of Monday, the mother remained in the hospital in stable condition, but was scheduled to appear in court yesterday
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Original:  ]]On Friday, the Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged a woman with murder, after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the  Air Force base Fort MacArthur residential facility in San Pedro, California.
Revised:  ]]On Friday, the Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged a woman with murder, after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the Air Force base residential facility in San Pedro, California.
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Original:  ]]On Friday, the Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged a woman with murder, after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the Fort MacArthur Air Force base  residential facility in San Pedro, California.
Revised:  ]]On Friday, the Los Angeles Police Department arrested and charged a woman with murder, after she reportedly stabbed her ten-year-old daughter to death at the Air Force base residential facility in San Pedro, California.
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Original:  Flight information was also displayed for standees at terminal 2.
Revised:  Flight information is also being displayed on standees at terminal 2.
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Original:  The information about flights arriving and departing from Terminal 3 was also displayed prominently at various points on the eight lane road from Hotel Radisson to Terminal 3."
Revised:  The information about flights arriving and departing from Terminal 3 will also be displayed prominently at various points on the eight lane road from Hotel Radisson to Terminal 3."
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Original: On Tuesday, before the Air India 777 was slated to arrive, an official from that airline said that “All the 220 passengers and 18 crew members of the New York flight (AI-102) would clear their emigrations at the new terminal.
Revised: On Tuesday, before the Air India 777 was slated to arrive, an official from that airline said that “All the 220 passengers and 18 crew members of the New York flight (AI-102) would clear their imigrations at the new terminal.
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Original: However, this was only one of nine “terminal process proving flights” that landed or departes from the brand-new steel and glass T3 on either Wednesday or Thursday.
Revised: However, this was only one of nine “terminal process proving flights” that landed or departed from the brand-new steel and glass T3 on either Wednesday or Thursday.
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Original:  On Tuesday, before the Air India 777 was slated to arrive, an official from that airline said that “All the 220 passengers and 18 crew members of the New York flight (AI-102) would clear their imigrations at the new terminal.
Revised:  On Tuesday, before the Air India 777 was slated to arrive, an official from that airline said that “All the 220 passengers and 18 crew members of the New York flight (AI-102) would clear their immigrations at the new terminal.
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Original:  In the same quarter last year  the company made a loss of $398 million.
Revised:  In the same quarter last year , the company made a loss of $398 million.
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Original: A 36 year-old man is recovering from surgery after having his leg seriously injured by the bite of a 5m long crocodile named 'Fatso' when he climbed into its pen, claiming he wanted to play with it.
Revised: A 36 year-old man is recovering from surgery after having his leg seriously injured by the bite of a five metre long crocodile named 'Fatso' when he climbed into its pen, claiming he wanted to play with it.
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Original:  The man, Michal Newman, is now in Broome's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with 'Fatso' that occured on Monday night at The Broome Crocodile Park.
Revised:  The man, Michael Newman, is now in Broome's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with 'Fatso' that occured on Monday night at The Broome Crocodile Park.
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Original:  The man, Michal Newman, is now in Broome's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with 'Fatso' that occured on Monday night at The Broome Crocodile Park.
Revised:  The man, Michal Newman, is now in Broome's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with 'Fatso' that occurred on Monday night at The Broome Crocodile Park.
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Original:  Experts suggest that due to it being Winter , the crocodile would of being generally inactive - if however, it was Summer and in warmer conditions the result could of been much worse.
Revised:  Experts suggest that as it is winter , the crocodile would of being generally inactive - if however, it was Summer and in warmer conditions the result could of been much worse.
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Original:  Experts suggest that due to it being Winter , the crocodile would of being generally inactive - if however, it was Summer and in warmer conditions the result could of been much worse.
Revised:  Experts suggest that due to it being Winter , the crocodile would be have been generally inactive that night. In warmer conditions the result could of been much worse.
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Original:  Experts suggest that due to it being Winter , the crocodile would of being generally inactive - if however, it was Summer and in warmer conditions the result could of been much worse.
Revised:  Experts suggest that due to it being Winter , the crocodile would of being generally inactive - if however, it was Summer and in warmer conditions the outcome could have been much worse.
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Original:  Newman, A.K.A 'Crocodile Dumb-dee' a name given to him by the Western Australian media  was earlier removed from a Broome tavern for drunk and disorderly conduct.
Revised:  Newman, nicknamed 'Crocodile Dumb-dee' a name given to him by the Western Australian media was earlier removed from a Broome tavern for drunk and disorderly conduct.
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Original:  Newman, A.K.A 'Crocodile Dumb-dee' a name given to him by the Western Australian media  was earlier removed from a Broome tavern for drunk and disorderly conduct.
Revised:  Newman, A.K.A 'Crocodile Dumb-dee' by the Western Australian media was earlier removed from a Broome tavern for drunk and disorderly conduct.
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Original:  Newman, A.K.A 'Crocodile Dumb-dee' a name given to him by the Western Australian media  was earlier removed from a Broome tavern for drunk and disorderly conduct.
Revised:  Newman, A.K.A 'Crocodile Dumb-dee' a name given to him by the Western Australian media , was earlier removed from a Broome tavern for drunk and disorderly conduct.
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Original: A 36 year-old man is recovering from surgery after having his leg seriously injured by the bite of a five metre long crocodile named 'Fatso ' when he climbed into its pen, claiming he wanted to play with it.
Revised: A 36 year-old man is recovering from surgery after his leg was seriously injured as a result of a bite from a five metre long crocodile named 'Fatso ' when he climbed into its pen, claiming he wanted to play with it.
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Original:  The man, Michal Newman, is now in Broome's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with 'Fatso' that occurred on Monday night at The Broome Crocodile Park.
Revised:  Newman, is now in Broome's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with 'Fatso' that occurred on Monday night at The Broome Crocodile Park.
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Original: Experts suggest that as it is winter, the crocodile would be have been generally inactive that night.
Revised: Experts suggest that as it is winter, the crocodile would be generally inactive at night.
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Original:  Newman , is now in Broome 's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with the crocodile which occurred on the night of Monday July 12 The Broome Crocodile Park.
Revised:  Newman is now in Broome 's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with the crocodile which occurred on the night of Monday July 12 The Broome Crocodile Park.
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Original:  Newman , is now in Broome 's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with the crocodile which occurred on the night of Monday July 12 The Broome Crocodile Park.
Revised:  Newman , is now in Broome Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with the crocodile which occurred on the night of Monday July 12 The Broome Crocodile Park.
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Original:  Newman , is now in Broome 's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with the crocodile which occurred on the night of Monday July 12 The Broome Crocodile Park.
Revised:  Newman , is now in Broome 's Hospital, Western Australia after his encounter with the crocodile which occurred on the night of Monday July 12 The Broome Crocodile Park.
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Original:  Newman , is now in Broome 's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with the crocodile which occurred on the night of Monday July 12 The Broome Crocodile Park.
Revised:  Newman , is now in Broome 's Hospital, Western Australia after his incident with the crocodile which occurred on Monday night at the Broome Crocodile Park.
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Original: Newman is now in Broome Hospital, Western Australia after his encounter with the crocodile which occurred on Monday night at the Broome Crocodile Park.
Revised: Newman is now in Broome Hospital, Western Australia after his skirmish with the crocodile which occurred on Monday night at the Broome Crocodile Park.
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Original: According to the park's website, the Broome Crocodile Park exhibits Nile, freshwater and saltwater crocodiles  and alligators.
Revised: According to the park's website, the Broome Crocodile Park exhibits Nile, freshwater and saltwater crocodiles , and alligators.
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Original:  This file photoshows an Australian saltwater crocodile.
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Original: When grabbed by the crocodile, Newman then clung to the fence and yelled at it until it let go, allowing him to scramble over the fence.
Revised: After being grabbed by the crocodile, Newman then clung to the fence and yelled at it until it let go, allowing him to scramble over the fence.
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Original: When grabbed by the crocodile, Newman then clung to the fence and yelled at it until it let go, allowing him to scramble over the fence.
Revised: When grabbed by the crocodile, Newman clung to the fence and yelled at it until it let go, allowing him to scramble over the fence.
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Original:  Toyota is also suspected of having electronic glitches in its computer-controlled throttle systems, but said on Wednesday that its investigations found no problems in the throttle systems.
Revised:  Toyota is also suspected of having electronic glitches in its computer-controlled throttle systems, but released a statement on Wednesday saying that its investigations found no problems in the throttle systems.
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Original:  Early analysis shows that the throttle was wide open and the brakes weren't engaged when the cars crashed, and suggests that the accidents may have been caused by drivers unintentionally flooring the accelerator instead of the brakes.
Revised:  Early analysis showed that the throttle was wide open and the brakes weren't engaged when the cars crashed, and suggests that the accidents may have been caused by drivers unintentionally flooring the accelerator instead of the brakes.
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Original:  The protest, which starts on August 30, is expected to attract up to 2,000 protestors . Similar events in the past have deteriorated into violent confrontations between police and activists.
Revised:  The protest, which starts on August 30, is expected to attract up to 2,000 protesters . Similar events in the past have deteriorated into violent confrontations between police and activists.
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Original:  The protest has }   been denied access to the Opera House forecord for the duration of the conference.
Revised:  The protest has } The protesters have been denied access to the Opera House forecord for the duration of the conference.
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Original:  The protest has }   been denied access to the Opera House forecord for the duration of the conference.
Revised:  The protest has } been denied access to the Opera House forecourt for the duration of the conference.
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Original:  He also accussed the police of deliberatly creating the conditions for confrontation.
Revised:  He also accused the police of deliberatly creating the conditions for confrontation.
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Original:  He also accussed the police of deliberatly creating the conditions for confrontation.
Revised:  He also accussed the police of deliberately creating the conditions for confrontation.
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Original:  We  ve urged police to build a barrier in front of the Opera House proper and to allow us to use the public space in the forecourt.
Revised:  We ' ve urged police to build a barrier in front of the Opera House proper and to allow us to use the public space in the forecourt.
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Original:  ASIO has assessed the conference to be "medium risk", and this has been used by the police and government to justify the increased security  
Revised:  ASIO has assessed the conference to be "medium risk", and this has been used by the police and government to justify the increased security . 
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Original:  Mr Knobloch described the attendees as "a few hundred w: neo-conservative neo-conservative corporate chiefs".
Revised:  Mr Knobloch described the attendees as "a few hundred neo-conservative neo-conservative corporate chiefs".
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Original:  Mr Knobloch described the attendees as "a few hundred w: neo-conservative neo-conservative corporate chiefs".
Revised:  Mr Knobloch described the attendees as "a few hundred w: neo-conservative corporate chiefs".
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Original:  Similar events in the past have deteriorated into violent confrontations between police and  activists.
Revised:  Similar events in the past often had instances of violent confrontations between police and activists.
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Original:  Similar events in the past have deteriorated into violent confrontations between police and  activists.
Revised:  Similar events in the past have deteriorated into violent confrontations between police and some of the activists.
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Original:  Sony is betting on it's Sony PS3 game system to draw consumers into Blu-ray.
Revised:  Sony is betting on its Sony PS3 game system to draw consumers into Blu-ray.
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Original:  For one, some think this may repeat another VHS and Beta Max battle.
Revised:  Some think this may repeat another VHS and Beta Max battle.
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Original:  However since there is no clear winner, NBC Universal aswell as Paramount Pictures both withdrew earlier announcements of releasing movies this year on the next generation formats.
Revised:  However since there is no clear winner, NBC Universal as well as Paramount Pictures both withdrew earlier announcements of releasing movies this year on the next generation formats.
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Original:  Some think this may repeat another VHS and Beta Max battle.
Revised:  Some think this may repeat another VHS and Betamax battle.
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Original: While Sonyis pushing for its Blu-ray Disc format, Toshiba is waging its HD-DVD format.
Revised: Sony, with their Blu-ray Disc format, Toshiba is waging its HD-DVD format.
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Original:  Others fear that because there is no clear winner  consumers will hold off until there is reassurrance that only one format will survive.
Revised:  Others fear that because there is no clear winner , consumers will hold off until there is reassurrance that only one format will survive.
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Original:  Since there is no clear winner, NBC Universal as well as Paramount Pictures both withdrew earlier announcements of releasing movies this year on the next generation formats.
Revised:  NBC Universal asnd Paramount Pictures have both withdrew earlier announcements of releasing movies this year on the next generation formats.
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Original:  But some industry insiders say it would be unlikely that any movies would be released this year based on a unified format of the two sides as it would take a few months to adjust the technologies from both sides and come up with a single format .
Revised:  Some industry insiders say it would be unlikely that any movies would be released this year based on a unified format of the two sides as it would take a few months to adjust the technologies from both sides and come up with a single format .
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Original: NBC Universal asnd Paramount Pictures have both withdrew earlier announcements of releasing movies this year on the next generation formats.
Revised: NBC Universal and Paramount Pictures have both withdrew earlier announcements of releasing movies this year on the next generation formats.
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Original: NBC Universal and Paramount Pictures have both withdrew earlier announcements of releasing movies this year on the next generation formats.
Revised: NBC Universal and Paramount Pictures have both withdrawn earlier announcements of releasing movies this year on the next generation formats.
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Original:  The Indian currency had previously lacked a distinctive symbol like those associated with the US dollar, euro, pound sterling and the yen.
Revised:  The Indian currency had previously lacked a distinctive symbol like those associated with the dollar, euro, pound sterling and the yen.
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Original:  The winning design came from a post-graduate student, D Udaya Kumar, who won Rs. 2½ lakhs or 250,000 or $ 7,500.
Revised:  The winning design came from a post-graduate student, D Udaya Kumar, who won $ 7,500.
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Original:  The winning design came from a post-graduate student, D Udaya Kumar, who won 8px|link=₨ 2,50, 000 (  $5,400).
Revised:  The winning design came from a post-graduate student, D Udaya Kumar, who won 8px|link=₨ 2,50, 000 ( US $5,400).
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Original:  Mr  Bush is a wealthy businessman and member of skull and bones.
Revised:  Mr . Bush is a wealthy businessman and member of skull and bones.
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Original:  He has also been President of the United States , the head of the CIA  and is the father of the current US President George W. Bush.
Revised:  He has also been President of the United States and the head of the CIA and is the father of the current US President George W. Bush.
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Original:  He has also been President of the United States , the head of the CIA  and is the father of the current US President George W. Bush.
Revised:  He has also been President of the United States , the head of the CIA , and is the father of the current US President George W. Bush.
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Original:  It is not yet known if the ASIO risk assessment for the event will change as a result of Mr Bush attending . Related articles Thousands expected to protest at Forbes Global CEO conference in Sydney Australian governments to partially fund Forbes conference Protestors want 'carnival not confrontation' at Forbes conference UR
Revised:  It is not yet known if the ASIO risk assessment for the event will change as a result of Mr Bush attending Related articles Thousands expected to protest at Forbes Global CEO conference in Sydney Australian governments to partially fund Forbes conference Protestors want 'carnival not confrontation' at Forbes conference UR
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Original:  It is not yet known if the ASIO risk assessment for the event will change as a result of Mr Bush attending . Related articles Thousands expected to protest at Forbes Global CEO conference in Sydney Australian governments to partially fund Forbes conference Protestors want 'carnival not confrontation' at Forbes conference UR
Revised:  It is not yet known if the ASIO risk assessment for the event will change as a result of Mr Bush attending . 
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Original: ''The information on which this article was based has since been reported to be a hoax.
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Original: The 30A network is organising a protest in Sydney to co-incide with the conference.
Revised: The 30A network is organising a protest in Sydney to coincide with the conference.
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Original: The law, which also allows same-sex couples to adopt, was voted on at 4 a.m. after 16 hours of debate by 33 votes  to 27  with three abstentions.
Revised: The law, which also allows same-sex couples to adopt, was voted on at 4 a.m. after 16 hours of debate and passed with 33 votes to 27 with three abstentions.
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