wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  FIFA awarded him  prestigous title of the best football player in the world  in 2005
Revised:  FIFA awarded him the prestigous title of the best football player in the world in 2005
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Original:  FIFA awarded him  prestigous title of the best football player in the world  in 2005
Revised:  FIFA awarded him prestigous title of " best football player in the world in 2005
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Original:  FIFA awarded him  prestigous title of the best football player in the world  in 2005
Revised:  FIFA awarded him prestigous title of the best football player in the world " in 2005
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Original: Nick farrell, a TechEYE journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could e attributed to record companies' continued reliance on Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this minset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
Revised: Nick farrell, a TechEYE journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could be attributed to record companies' continued reliance on Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this minset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
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Original: Nick farrell, a TechEYE journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could e attributed to record companies' continued reliance on Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this minset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
Revised: Nick farrell, a TechEYE journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could e attributed to record companies' continued reliance on Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this mindset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
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Original:  What they should have been doing is working out how to get high quality music onto other formats, perhaps even HiFi before the iPlod fad died out."
Revised:  What they should have been doing is working out how to get high quality music onto other formats, perhaps even HiFi before the iPod fad died out."
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Original:  What they should have been doing is working out how to get high quality music onto other formats, perhaps even HiFi before the iPod fad died out."
Revised:  What they should have been doing is working out how to get high quality music onto other formats, perhaps even HiFi before the iPlod fad died out."
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Original:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whethe r from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon."
Revised:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon."
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Original:  But as Apple again prepares to unveil a redesigned product, the company has released their quarterly sales figures—and revealed that they have sold only 9m iPods for the quarter to june —the lowest number of sales since 2006, leading industry anylists to ponder whether the world's most successful music device is in decline.
Revised:  But as Apple again prepares to unveil a redesigned product, the company has released their quarterly sales figures—and revealed that they have sold only 9m iPods for the quarter to June —the lowest number of sales since 2006, leading industry anylists to ponder whether the world's most successful music device is in decline.
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Original: Nick farrell , a TechEYE journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could be attributed to record companies' continued reliance on Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this mindset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
Revised: Nick Farrell , a TechEYE journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could be attributed to record companies' continued reliance on Steve Jobs, CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this mindset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
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Original:  He said "In these grief-filled moments I can take immense pride from the fact that a character such as Francisco Varallo, whom we shall never forget, represented the football family with such dignity" . Category:Football (soccer) Category:Obituaries Category:South America Category:Spor
Revised:  He said "In these grief-filled moments I can take immense pride from the fact that a character such as Francisco Varallo, whom we shall never forget, represented the football family with such dignity" Category:Football (soccer) Category:Obituaries Category:South America Category:Spor
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Original:  He said "In these grief-filled moments I can take immense pride from the fact that a character such as Francisco Varallo, whom we shall never forget, represented the football family with such dignity" . Category:Football (soccer) Category:Obituaries Category:South America Category:Spor
Revised:  He said "In these grief-filled moments I can take immense pride from the fact that a character such as Francisco Varallo, whom we shall never forget, represented the football family with such dignity" . 
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Original: Upon seeing the video in a private screening, family members, who are living in a small village of tents at the entrance to the San José copper-gold mine — which they have named Camp Hope — were elated.
Revised: Upon seeing the video in a private screening, family members, who are living in a small village of tents at the entrance to the San José copper–gold mine — which they have named Camp Hope — were elated.
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Original:   On average, each man has lost 22 pounds (10 kilograms) since they became trapped three weeks ago, and dehydration remains a threat.
Revised:  . . On average, each man has lost 22 pounds (10 kilograms) since they became trapped three weeks ago, and dehydration remains a threat.
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Original:   People who are trained for emergencies – like these miners – tend to minimize their own needs or to ignore them.
Revised:  . People who are trained for emergencies – like these miners – tend to minimize their own needs or to ignore them.
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Original:   The work will require about a half-dozen men working in shifts 24 hours a day."
Revised:  . The work will require about a half-dozen men working in shifts 24 hours a day."
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Original:   He is aware that the rescue is not going to happen today, that it will take some time.
Revised:  . He is aware that the rescue is not going to happen today, that it will take some time.
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Original:   He sounded relaxed and since it was so short I didn't manage to ask anything.
Revised:  . He sounded relaxed and since it was so short I didn't manage to ask anything.
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Original:   At first they told us he had been crushed [to death]." Esteban Rojas sent up a letter from inside the mine, proposing to his long-time partner Jessica Yanez, 43.
Revised:  . At first they told us he had been crushed [to death]." Esteban Rojas sent up a letter from inside the mine, proposing to his long-time partner Jessica Yanez, 43.
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Original:  "We have talked about it before, but he never asked me  .. . He knows that however long it takes, I'll wait for him, because with him I've been through good and bad."
Revised:  "We have talked about it before, but he never asked me . .. . He knows that however long it takes, I'll wait for him, because with him I've been through good and bad."
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Original: 270px|Rescue efforts to save the 33 Chilean miners trapped 700 meters from the the surface continue.
Revised: 270px|Rescue efforts to save the 33 Chilean miners trapped 700 meters from the surface continue.
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Original:  Over the weekend, video images filmed by the miners emerged showing the miners playing dominoes at a table and singing the the Chilean national anthem.
Revised:  Over the weekend, video images filmed by the miners emerged showing the miners playing dominoes at a table and singing the Chilean national anthem.
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Original:  Giving a guided tour of the area they are occupying, Mario Sepulvedra , one of the miners, explains they have a "little cup to brush our teeth", and a place where they pray each day.
Revised:  Giving a guided tour of the area they are occupying, Mario Sepúlveda , one of the miners, explains they have a "little cup to brush our teeth", and a place where they pray each day.
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Original:  It has been reported that Mario Gomez , 63, has become the group's "spiritual leader", having worked in the mines for over fifty years.
Revised:  It has been reported that Mario Gómez , 63, has become the group's "spiritual leader", having worked in the mines for over fifty years.
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Original: Upon seeing the video in a private screening, family members, who are living in a small village of tents at the entrance to the San José copper-gold mine—which they have named Camp Hope—were elated.
Revised: Upon seeing the video in a private screening, family members, who are living in a small village of tents at the entrance to the copper-gold mine—which they have named Camp Hope—were elated.
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Original:  Dr  Rodrigo Figueroa, head of the trauma, stress and disaster unit at the Catholic university in Santiago, Chile, explained that "following the euphoria of being discovered, the normal psychological reaction would be for the men to collapse in a combination of fatigue and stress ...
Revised:  Dr . Rodrigo Figueroa, head of the trauma, stress and disaster unit at the Catholic university in Santiago, Chile, explained that "following the euphoria of being discovered, the normal psychological reaction would be for the men to collapse in a combination of fatigue and stress ...
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Original:  Dr  Rodrigo Figueroa, head of the trauma, stress and disaster unit at the Catholic university in Santiago, Chile, explained that "following the euphoria of being discovered, the normal psychological reaction would be for the men to collapse in a combination of fatigue and stress ...
Revised:  Dr Rodrigo Figueroa, head of the trauma, stress and disaster unit at the in Santiago, Chile, explained that "following the euphoria of being discovered, the normal psychological reaction would be for the men to collapse in a combination of fatigue and stress ...
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Original:  "I would say depression is the correct word ".
Revised:  "I would say depression is the correct word ."
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Original:  When it is time to ask for help, they don't ". NASA has advised emergency workers that entertaining the miners would be a good idea.
Revised:  When it is time to ask for help, they don't ." NASA has advised emergency workers that entertaining the miners would be a good idea.
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Original:  Ivan Viveros Aranas, a Chilean policeman working at Camp Hope, told reporters that Chile "has shown a unity regardless of religion or social class.
Revised:  Iván Viveros Aranas, a Chilean policeman working at Camp Hope, told reporters that Chile "has shown a unity regardless of religion or social class.
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Original:  You see people arriving here just to volunteer, they have no relation at all to these families ".
Revised:  You see people arriving here just to volunteer, they have no relation at all to these families ."
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Original:  Andres Sougarret, a senior engineer involved in operating the drill said that “ the miners are going to have to take out all that material as it falls ".
Revised:  Andrés Sougarret, a senior engineer involved in operating the drill said that “ the miners are going to have to take out all that material as it falls ".
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Original:  Andres Sougarret, a senior engineer involved in operating the drill said that “ the miners are going to have to take out all that material as it falls ".
Revised:  Andres Sougarret, a senior engineer involved in operating the drill said that " the miners are going to have to take out all that material as it falls ".
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Original:  Andres Sougarret, a senior engineer involved in operating the drill said that “ the miners are going to have to take out all that material as it falls ".
Revised:  Andres Sougarret, a senior engineer involved in operating the drill said that “ the miners are going to have to take out all that material as it falls ."
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Original:  The governor of the Atacama region , Ximena Matas, said that there had been "moments of great emotion ".
Revised:  The Intendant of the , Ximena Matas, said that there had been "moments of great emotion ".
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Original:  The governor of the Atacama region , Ximena Matas, said that there had been "moments of great emotion ".
Revised:  The governor of the Atacama region , Ximena Matas, said that there had been "moments of great emotion ."
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Original:  This has been a very important moment, which no doubt strengthens their [the miners'] morale ".
Revised:  This has been a very important moment, which no doubt strengthens their [the miners'] morale ."
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Original:  Twenty seconds was nothing", said said Jessica Cortes , who spoke to her husband Victor Zamora, who was not even a miner, but a vehicle mechanic.
Revised:  Twenty seconds was nothing", said said Jessica Cortés , who spoke to her husband Victor Zamora, who was not even a miner, but a vehicle mechanic.
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Original:  Twenty seconds was nothing", said said Jessica Cortes , who spoke to her husband Victor Zamora, who was not even a miner, but a vehicle mechanic.
Revised:  Twenty seconds was nothing", said said Jessica Cortes , who spoke to her husband Víctor Zamora, who was not even a miner, but a vehicle mechanic.
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Original:  Yanez told a newspaper that she thought he was never going to ask her.
Revised:  Yáñez told a newspaper that she thought he was never going to ask her.
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Original:  His withdrawal was announced by new team coach François Zahou 
Revised:  His withdrawal was announced by new team coach François Zahoui. 
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Original:  We will let him rest to recover his mental and physical strength and pray he comes back some day to the national team  
Revised:  We will let him rest to recover his mental and physical strength and pray he comes back some day to the national team .” 
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Original: A has said that there is no problem between Drogba and the F.  
Revised: A has said that there is no problem between Drogba and the F. A. 
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Original: Zahoui was speaking at a press confrence when that he had a meeting with Drogba.
Revised: Zahoui said at a press confrence when that he had a meeting with Drogba.
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Original: Zahoui was speaking at a press confrence when that he had a meeting with Drogba.
Revised: Zahoui was speaking at a press confrence that he had a meeting with Drogba.
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Original: Domino, 77, lives in the city's 9th ward , one of the areas hardest hit by Katrina.
Revised: Domino, 77, lives in the city's 9th Ward , one of the areas hardest hit by Katrina.
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Original: Many of Microsoft competitors in the instant messaging market , already offer VoIP service or are working on providing it in the near future.
Revised: Many of Microsoft competitors in the instant messaging market already offer VoIP service or are working on providing it in the near future.
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Original:  Google recently launched Google Talk, an instant messaging program with free PC to PC calling  PC to Phone calling is rumoured to be in the works.
Revised:  Google recently launched Google Talk, an instant messaging program with free PC to PC calling . PC to Phone calling is rumoured to be in the works.
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Original: Teleo had been running a public beta  of its VoIP software, but it has now been discontinued.
Revised: Teleo had been running a public beta test of its VoIP software, but it has now been discontinued.
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Original: Microsoft Corp. has acquired voice over Internet protocol (VoIP) provider Teleo Inc  , on August 30, for an undisclosed sum.
Revised: Microsoft Corp. has acquired voice over Internet protocol (VoIP) provider Teleo Inc . , on August 30, for an undisclosed sum.
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Original:  Alleged London bomber Muhammad Sadiq Khan also appeared on the tape and outlined his reasons for the bombings    
Revised:  Alleged London bomber Muhammad Sadiq Khan also appeared on the tape and outlined his reasons for the bombings . 
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Original:  In it , the terror group's second in command Ayman al-Zawahiri has claimed responsibility for the July 7 London bombings and threatened further attacks.
Revised:  In one of them , the terror group's second in command Ayman al-Zawahiri has claimed responsibility for the July 7 London bombings and threatened further attacks.
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Original:  The alleged leader of the London bombers, Mohammad Sidique Khan, also appeared on the tape and outlined his reasons for the bombings.
Revised:  The alleged leader of the London bombers, Mohammad Sidique Khan, appeared on a seperate recording and outlined his reasons for the bombings.
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Original: Google, which has become one of the world 's most influential companies by selling online advertising, has expanded past cyberspace Wednesday when it began reselling print ads in technology magazines.
Revised: Google, which has become one of the internet 's most influential companies by selling online advertising, has expanded past cyberspace Wednesday when it began reselling print ads in technology magazines.
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Original:  In a small experiment, the first print-based venture for the company, Google bought pages of advertising in magazines such as PC Magazine and MacAddict and sold portions of each page to smaller companies.
Revised:  In a small-scale experiment, the first print-based venture for the company, Google bought pages of advertising in magazines such as PC Magazine and MacAddict and sold portions of each page to smaller companies.
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Original: Google, which has become one of the internet's most influential companies by selling online advertising, has expanded past cyberspace Wednesday when it began reselling print ads in technology magazines.
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Original:  In his career Fignon won 76 races including the La Flèche Wallonne in 1986, Milan-San Remo in both 1988 and 1989 and the Giro d'Italia in 198 
Revised:  In his career Fignon won 76 races including the La Flèche Wallonne in 1986, Milan-San Remo in both 1988 and 1989 and the Giro d'Italia in 1989. 
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Original:  He continued to work for France 2 throughout his treatment and even commentated on the 2010 Tour de Franc
Revised:  He continued to work for France 2 throughout his treatment and even commentated on the 2010 Tour de France
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Original:  Fignon had been batteling the disease since 2009.
Revised:  Fignon had been battling the disease since 2009.
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Original:  Fignon won the Tour de France in 1983 and 1984 but he is also remembered for the 1989 race.
Revised:  Fignon won the Tour de France in 1983 and 1984 but is also remembered for the 1989 race.
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Original:  He stayed in cycling even after his retirment managing races.
Revised:  Fignon stayed in cycling even after his retirment managing races.
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Original:  In 2006 he joined television station, France 2 as a commentator.
Revised:  In 2006 he joined the television station France 2 as a commentator.
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Original: File:Trypanosoma cruzi crithidia.jpeg| A trypanosoma brucei]]
Revised: File:Trypanosoma cruzi crithidia.jpeg| File photo of trypanosoma brucei]]
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Original:  A team of researchers from the University of Georgia and University of Glasgow have found the defense mechanism the Trypanosome parasiteevolved against human immune system.
Revised:  Research teams from the universities of Georgia and University of Glasgow have found the defense mechanism the Trypanosome parasiteevolved against human immune system.
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Original:  The study follows a recent outbreak of deathly sleeping sickness disease which this parasite causesin Africa .
Revised:  Their study follows a recent outbreak of deathly sleeping sickness disease which this parasite causesin Africa .
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Original:  The study follows a recent outbreak of deathly sleeping sickness disease which this parasite causesin Africa .
Revised:  The study follows a recent African outbreak of the disease thi parasite causes .
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Original:  The discovery is expected to help to develop a cure mechanism to prevent deaths from this disease in future . [[File:Tsetse foldedWings.jpeg|A tsetse fly  ]] The 1998-2001 sleeping sickness epidemics in South Sudan, Angola, Democratic Republic of Congo and Uganda caused tens of thousands of death.
Revised:  The discovery is expected to help develop a cure mechanism to prevent deaths from this disease in future . [[File:Tsetse foldedWings.jpeg|A tsetse fly ]] The 1998-2001 sleeping sickness epidemics in South Sudan, Angola, Democratic Republic of Congo and Uganda caused tens of thousands of death.
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Original:  The discovery is expected to help to develop a cure mechanism to prevent deaths from this disease in future . [[File:Tsetse foldedWings.jpeg|A tsetse fly  ]] The 1998-2001 sleeping sickness epidemics in South Sudan, Angola, Democratic Republic of Congo and Uganda caused tens of thousands of death.
Revised:  The discovery is expected to help to develop a cure preventing future deaths. [[File:Tsetse foldedWings.jpeg|A tsetse fly ]] The 1998-2001 sleeping sickness epidemics in South Sudan, Angola, Democratic Republic of Congo and Uganda caused tens of thousands of death.
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Original: File:Trypanosoma cruzi crithidia.jpeg|File photo of trypanosoma brucei]] Research teams from the universities of Georgia and Glasgow discovered the Trypanosome parasite, responsible for 'sleeping sickness' evolved to circumvent the human immune system.
Revised: File:Trypanosoma cruzi crithidia.jpeg|File photo of trypanosoma brucei]] Research teams from the universities of Georgia and Glasgow discovered the mechanism the Trypanosome parasite evolved for 'sleeping sickness' evolved to circumvent the human immune system.
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Original: File:Trypanosoma cruzi crithidia.jpeg|File photo of trypanosoma brucei]] Research teams from the universities of Georgia and Glasgow discovered the Trypanosome parasite, responsible for 'sleeping sickness' evolved to circumvent the human immune system.
Revised: File:Trypanosoma cruzi crithidia.jpeg|File photo of trypanosoma brucei]] Research teams from the universities of Georgia and Glasgow discovered the Trypanosome parasite, responsible for 'sleeping sickness' disease to circumvent the human immune system.
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Original:  Their study follows a recent African outbreak of the disease thi parasite causes.
Revised:  Their study follows a recent African outbreak of the disease this parasite causes.
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