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Original:  He was the son of Don Diego Salinas, a man of Basque decent that was sent to the Americas as governor of Yahuarzongo and of Doña Maria de Zenitagoya a woman from a wealthy family in Quito .
Revised:  He was the son of Don Diego Salinas, a man of Basque decent that was sent to the Americas as governor of Yahuarzongo and of Doña Maria de Zenitagoya , from a wealthy family in Quito .
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Original:  He was the son of Don Diego Salinas, a man of Basque decent that was sent to the Americas as governor of Yahuarzongo and of Doña Maria de Zenitagoya a woman from a wealthy family in Quito .
Revised:  He was the son of Don Diego Salinas, a man of Basque decent that was sent to the Americas as governor of Yahuarzongo and of Doña Maria de Zenitagoya a woman from a wealthy Quito family .
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Original:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo that was affected by an indigenous uprising . Returning from this campaign , around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route  to Quijos in the Amazon from Quito , to define limits with Brazil.
Revised:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo , which was experiencing an uprising of the indigenous peoples . Returning from this campaign , around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route to Quijos in the Amazon from Quito , to define limits with Brazil.
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Original:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo that was affected by an indigenous uprising . Returning from this campaign , around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route  to Quijos in the Amazon from Quito , to define limits with Brazil.
Revised:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo that was affected by an indigenous uprising . Returning from this campaign around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route to Quijos in the Amazon from Quito , to define limits with Brazil.
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Original:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo that was affected by an indigenous uprising . Returning from this campaign , around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route  to Quijos in the Amazon from Quito , to define limits with Brazil.
Revised:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo that was affected by an indigenous uprising . Returning from this campaign , around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route from Quito to Quijos in the Amazon from Quito , to define limits with Brazil.
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Original:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo that was affected by an indigenous uprising . Returning from this campaign , around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route  to Quijos in the Amazon from Quito , to define limits with Brazil.
Revised:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo that was affected by an indigenous uprising . Returning from this campaign , around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route to Quijos in the Amazon , to define limits with Brazil.
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Original:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo that was affected by an indigenous uprising . Returning from this campaign , around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route  to Quijos in the Amazon from Quito , to define limits with Brazil.
Revised:  In that capacity he was ordered to pacify the area around Otavalo that was affected by an indigenous uprising . Returning from this campaign , around 1778, he was sent with Apolinar Diez de la Fuente, who had just opened a route to Quijos in the Amazon from Quito , to define the border with Brazil.
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Original:  They reached the Marañón river around April 1780, but Salinas got sick and had to return to Pevas.
Revised:  They reached the Marañón river around April 1780, but Salinas fell ill and had to return to Pevas.
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Original:  Once recovered he spent the next few years exploring the Amazonian jungle, but in 1783 he became ill again and was ordered back to the highlands  where he was stationed in the military garrison of the Royal Audiencia of Quito.
Revised:  Once recovered he spent the next few years exploring the Amazonian jungle, but in 1783 he became ill again and was ordered back to the highlands , where he was stationed in the military garrison of the Royal Audiencia of Quito.
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Original:  By 1801 he was commanding the military corps stationed in Quito and seemed to be very popular with the troops due to his generous character and proven valor.
Revised:  By 1801 he was commanding the military corps stationed in Quito and seemed to be very popular with the troops for his generous character and proven valor.
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Original:  Around 1803 he was sent on a mission that took him and his troops all the way the Isthmus of Panama, were he encountered trouble with the local authorities.
Revised:  Around 1803 he was sent on a mission that took him and his troops all the way the Isthmus of Panama, where he encountered trouble with the local authorities.
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Original:  At his return to Quito , he found a city in conflict, divided into two factions: the "capetones" or European born Spaniardsand criollos (American born Spaniards).
Revised:  On his return to Quito , he found a city in conflict, divided into two factions: the "capetones" or European born Spaniardsand criollos (American born Spaniards).
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Original:  At his return to Quito , he found a city in conflict, divided into two factions: the "capetones" or European born Spaniardsand criollos (American born Spaniards).
Revised:  At his return to Quito he found a city in conflict, divided into two factions: the "capetones" or European born Spaniardsand criollos (American born Spaniards).
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Original:  At his return to Quito , he found a city in conflict, divided into two factions: the "capetones" or European born Spaniardsand criollos (American born Spaniards).
Revised:  At his return to Quito , he found a city in conflict, divided into two factions: the capetones, or European-born Spaniards, and the criollos (American-born Spaniards).
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Original:  The “local” elites resented the preference that the Spanish born had to high level bureaucratic appointments.
Revised:  The “local” elites resented the way in which the Spanish-born were preferred for high-level bureaucratic appointments.
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Original:  On the December 25th 1808, he went to the meeting that the Marques de Selva Alegre had arranged in his estate in the valley of Chillos.
Revised:  On the December 25th 1808, he went to the meeting that the Marques de Selva Alegre had arranged on his estate in the valley of Chillos.
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Original:  But it wasn’t until August 1809 the group used the invasion of Napoleon of Spain to justify the creation of an autonomous government in the Royal Audienciaof Quito, and while declaring loyalty to the true king Ferdinand VII of Spain,  took power from the appointed Spanish representatives.
Revised:  But only in August 1809 the group used the invasion of Napoleon of Spain to justify the creation of an autonomous government in the Royal Audienciaof Quito, and while declaring loyalty to the true king Ferdinand VII of Spain, took power from the appointed Spanish representatives.
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Original:  But it wasn’t until August 1809 the group used the invasion of Napoleon of Spain to justify the creation of an autonomous government in the Royal Audienciaof Quito, and while declaring loyalty to the true king Ferdinand VII of Spain,  took power from the appointed Spanish representatives.
Revised:  But it wasn’t until August 1809 the group used the invasion of Napoleon of Spain to justify the creation of an autonomous government in the Audiencia. While declaring loyalty to the true king Ferdinand VII of Spain, took power from the appointed Spanish representatives.
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Original:  But it wasn’t until August 1809 the group used the invasion of Napoleon of Spain to justify the creation of an autonomous government in the Royal Audienciaof Quito, and while declaring loyalty to the true king Ferdinand VII of Spain,  took power from the appointed Spanish representatives.
Revised:  But it wasn’t until August 1809 the group used the invasion of Napoleon of Spain to justify the creation of an autonomous government in the Royal Audienciaof Quito, and while declaring loyalty to King Ferdinand VII of Spain, took power from the appointed Spanish representatives.
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Original:  But it wasn’t until August 1809 the group used the invasion of Napoleon of Spain to justify the creation of an autonomous government in the Royal Audienciaof Quito, and while declaring loyalty to the true king Ferdinand VII of Spain,  took power from the appointed Spanish representatives.
Revised:  But it wasn’t until August 1809 the group used the invasion of Napoleon of Spain to justify the creation of an autonomous government in the Royal Audienciaof Quito, and while declaring loyalty to the true king Ferdinand VII of Spain, they took power from the appointed Spanish representatives.
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Original:  On the morning of the 10th Salinas went to the barracks he commanded and convinced the troop that it was their patriotic duty to resist the French usurpation.
Revised:  On the morning of August 10 Salinas went to the barracks he commanded and convinced the troop that it was their patriotic duty to resist the French usurpation.
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Original:  On the morning of the 10th Salinas went to the barracks he commanded and convinced the troop that it was their patriotic duty to resist the French usurpation.
Revised:  On the morning of the 10th Salinas went to the barracks he commanded and convinced the troops that it was their patriotic duty to resist the French usurpation.
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Original:  He took three battalions into the streets to start the revolt and  effective power in the capital.
Revised:  He took three battalions into the streets to start the revolt and gain effective power in the capital.
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Original:  Salinas was given the grade of Coronel by the Junta and the Marques de Selva Alegre, somewhat forcedly, was given overall command of the government and  small army.
Revised:  Salinas was given the rank of Colonel by the Junta and the Marques de Selva Alegre, somewhat forcedly, was given overall command of the government and small army.
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Original:  Salinas was given the grade of Coronel by the Junta and the Marques de Selva Alegre, somewhat forcedly, was given overall command of the government and  small army.
Revised:  Salinas was given the grade of Coronel by the Junta , while the Marques de Selva Alegre, somewhat forcedly, was given overall command of the government and small army.
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Original:  Salinas was given the grade of Coronel by the Junta and the Marques de Selva Alegre, somewhat forcedly, was given overall command of the government and  small army.
Revised:  Salinas was given the grade of Coronel by the Junta and the Marques de Selva Alegre, somewhat forcedly, was given overall command of the government and the small army.
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Original:  It was  poorly organized and ill equipped group.
Revised:  It was a poorly organized and ill equipped group.
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Original:  In addition to the fact that the noble (titled) leaders were not all sure about the radical turn the revolt had taken,  they had wanted better treatment from Madrid, not a complete severing of ties from the mother country.
Revised:  In addition to the fact that the noble (titled) leaders were uncomfortable with the radical turn the revolt had taken, they had wanted better treatment from Madrid, not a complete severing of ties from the mother country.
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Original:  In addition to the fact that the noble (titled) leaders were not all sure about the radical turn the revolt had taken,  they had wanted better treatment from Madrid, not a complete severing of ties from the mother country.
Revised:  In addition to the fact that the noble (titled) leaders were not all sure about the radical turn the revolt had taken, as they had wanted better treatment from Madrid, not a complete severing of ties from the mother country.
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Original:  It took the royal forces less than two months to organize a counter revolution, on October 13 de Marques de Selva Alegre offered his resignation to the Junta and was replaced by his kinsman the Count of Selva Florida  who started talks with the deposed Count Ruiz de Castilla ( the royal representative of Spain ).
Revised:  It took the royal forces less than two months to organize a counterrevolution. On October 13 de Marques de Selva Alegre offered his resignation to the Junta and was replaced by his kinsman the Count of Selva Florida who started talks with the deposed Count Ruiz de Castilla ( the royal representative of Spain ).
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Original:  It took the royal forces less than two months to organize a counter revolution, on October 13 de Marques de Selva Alegre offered his resignation to the Junta and was replaced by his kinsman the Count of Selva Florida  who started talks with the deposed Count Ruiz de Castilla ( the royal representative of Spain ).
Revised:  It took the royal forces less than two months to organize a counter revolution, on October 13 the Marques de Selva Alegre offered his resignation to the Junta and was replaced by his kinsman the Count of Selva Florida who started talks with the deposed Count Ruiz de Castilla ( the royal representative of Spain ).
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Original:  It took the royal forces less than two months to organize a counter revolution, on October 13 de Marques de Selva Alegre offered his resignation to the Junta and was replaced by his kinsman the Count of Selva Florida  who started talks with the deposed Count Ruiz de Castilla ( the royal representative of Spain ).
Revised:  It took the royal forces less than two months to organize a counter revolution, on October 13 de Marques de Selva Alegre offered his resignation to the Junta and was replaced by his kinsman the Count of Selva Florida , who started talks with the deposed Count Ruiz de Castilla ( the royal representative of Spain ).
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Original:  It took the royal forces less than two months to organize a counter revolution, on October 13 de Marques de Selva Alegre offered his resignation to the Junta and was replaced by his kinsman the Count of Selva Florida  who started talks with the deposed Count Ruiz de Castilla ( the royal representative of Spain ).
Revised:  It took the royal forces less than two months to organize a counter revolution, on October 13 de Marques de Selva Alegre offered his resignation to the Junta and was replaced by his kinsman the Count of Selva Florida who started talks with the deposed Count Ruiz de Castilla , the royal representative of Spain ).
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Original:  On the 24th of November troops sent by the viceroy of Peru, and commanded by Manuel de Arredondo , arrived in Quito and promptly took over the city and returned Ruiz de Castilla to power.
Revised:  On the 24th of November troops sent by the viceroy of Peru, and commanded by Manuel de Arredondo . They arrived in Quito and promptly took over the city and returned Ruiz de Castilla to power.
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Original:  Salinas was imprisoned on December 4 and taken to the military barrack for treason.
Revised:  Salinas was imprisoned on December 4 and taken to the military barracks, charged with treason.
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Original:  He spent the next eight months imprisoned in the military dungeons with other “conspirators” . His wife and daughters were also under house arrest, but arranged for a group of patriots to try to free her husband.
Revised:  He spent the next eight months imprisoned in the military dungeons with other "conspirators" . His wife and daughters were also under house arrest, but arranged for a group of patriots to try to free her husband.
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Original:  He spent the next eight months imprisoned in the military dungeons with other “conspirators” . His wife and daughters were also under house arrest, but arranged for a group of patriots to try to free her husband.
Revised:  He spent the next eight months imprisoned in the military dungeons with other “conspirators” . His wife and daughters were under house arrest, but arranged for a group of patriots to try to free her husband.
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Original:  On August 2, 1810 as the people of Quito tried to save the imprisoned men , they were butchered by the stationed troops as the lay in their cells.
Revised:  On August 2, 1810 , while the people of Quito tried to save the imprisoned men , they were butchered by the stationed troops as the lay in their cells.
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Original:  On August 2, 1810 as the people of Quito tried to save the imprisoned men , they were butchered by the stationed troops as the lay in their cells.
Revised:  On August 2, 1810 as the people of Quito were trying to save them, the imprisoned men , they were butchered by the stationed troops as the lay in their cells.
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Original:  On August 2, 1810 as the people of Quito tried to save the imprisoned men , they were butchered by the stationed troops as the lay in their cells.
Revised:  On August 2, 1810 as the people of Quito tried to save the imprisoned men were butchered by the stationed troops as the lay in their cells.
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Original:  On August 2, 1810 as the people of Quito tried to save the imprisoned men , they were butchered by the stationed troops as the lay in their cells.
Revised:  On August 2, 1810 as the people of Quito tried to save the imprisoned men , they were butchered by the troops as they lay in their cells.
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Original:  His wife and daughters were taken to be hung in the central plaza, but the nuns of the convent of Concepcion intervened and took them to refuge.
Revised:  His wife and daughters were taken to be hanged in the central plaza, but the nuns of the convent of Concepcion intervened and took them to refuge.
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Original:  His wife and daughters were taken to be hung in the central plaza, but the nuns of the convent of Concepcion intervened and took them to refuge.
Revised:  His wife and daughters were taken to be hung in the central plaza, but the nuns of the Convent of Concepcion intervened and took them to refuge.
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Original:  His youngest daughter Maria del Carmen, who was born while he was in captivity, married Don Manuel de Ascasubi who also took part in the independence process and helped in the formation of the young  nation.
Revised:  His youngest daughter Maria del Carmen, who was born while he was in captivity, married Manuel de Ascásubi, who also took part in the independence process and helped in the formation of the young nation.
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Original:  The family was persecuted and their holdings expropriated until the war of Independence finally ended and the victorious Marshall Antonio José de Sucre returned all that was taken to Salinas's heirs . Captain Juan de Salinas is remembered as the first military leader in what is now Ecuador and one of the first “martyrs ” of the wars of Independence.
Revised:  The family was persecuted and their holdings expropriated until the War of Independence ended and the victorious Marshall Antonio José de Sucre returned all that was taken to Salinas's heirs . Captain Juan de Salinas is remembered as the first military leader in what is now Ecuador and one of the first “martyrs ” of the wars of Independence.
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Original:  The family was persecuted and their holdings expropriated until the war of Independence finally ended and the victorious Marshall Antonio José de Sucre returned all that was taken to Salinas's heirs . Captain Juan de Salinas is remembered as the first military leader in what is now Ecuador and one of the first “martyrs ” of the wars of Independence.
Revised:  The family was persecuted and their holdings expropriated until the war of Independence finally ended and the victorious Marshall Antonio José de Sucre returned to Salinas's heirs . Captain Juan de Salinas is remembered as the first military leader in what is now Ecuador and one of the first “martyrs ” of the wars of Independence.
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Original:  The family was persecuted and their holdings expropriated until the war of Independence finally ended and the victorious Marshall Antonio José de Sucre returned all that was taken to Salinas's heirs . Captain Juan de Salinas is remembered as the first military leader in what is now Ecuador and one of the first “martyrs ” of the wars of Independence.
Revised:  The family was persecuted and their holdings expropriated until the war of Independence finally ended and the victorious Marshall Antonio José de Sucre returned all that was taken to Salinas's heirs all that had been taken. Juan de Salinas is remembered as the first military leader in what is now Ecuador and one of the first “martyrs ” of the wars of Independence.
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Original:  The family was persecuted and their holdings expropriated until the war of Independence finally ended and the victorious Marshall Antonio José de Sucre returned all that was taken to Salinas's heirs . Captain Juan de Salinas is remembered as the first military leader in what is now Ecuador and one of the first “martyrs ” of the wars of Independence.
Revised:  The family was persecuted and their holdings expropriated until the war of Independence finally ended and the victorious Marshall Antonio José de Sucre returned all that was taken to Salinas's heirs . Captain Juan de Salinas is remembered as the first military leader in what is now Ecuador and one of the first martyrs of the Wars of Independence.
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Original: Dr. Bhagwandas Patel Gujarati folklorist, Birth date : 19 /11/ 1943 Birth Place : Jamla,Himatnagar taluka, Dist- sabarkantha study : B.A - 1967 Hindi Gujarati , M.A - 1972 Hindi%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Sanskrit, M.Phil - 1984 Folklore : "Khedbhrma ane danta talukana dungaribhil adivasi oma gavata paoranik arelo : ek abhyas" Ph.d - 1990, 'khedbrama talukani pragatihasik sanskrutio' Awards : 1- 'Bhasha sanman', 1998, centerel sahitya akadami delhi.
Revised:  Birth date : 19 /11/ 1943 Birth Place : Jamla,Himatnagar taluka, Dist- sabarkantha study : B.A - 1967 Hindi Gujarati , M.A - 1972 Hindi%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Sanskrit, M.Phil - 1984 Folklore : "Khedbhrma ane danta talukana dungaribhil adivasi oma gavata paoranik arelo : ek abhyas" Ph.d - 1990, 'khedbrama talukani pragatihasik sanskrutio' Awards : 1- 'Bhasha sanman', 1998, centerel sahitya akadami delhi.
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Original: Dr. Bhagwandas Patel Gujarati folklorist, Birth date : 19 /11/ 1943 Birth Place : Jamla,Himatnagar taluka, Dist- sabarkantha study : B.A - 1967 Hindi Gujarati , M.A - 1972 Hindi%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Sanskrit, M.Phil - 1984 Folklore : "Khedbhrma ane danta talukana dungaribhil adivasi oma gavata paoranik arelo : ek abhyas" Ph.d - 1990, 'khedbrama talukani pragatihasik sanskrutio' Awards : 1- 'Bhasha sanman', 1998, centerel sahitya akadami delhi.
Revised: Dr. Bhagwandas Patel Gujarati folklorist, Bhagwandas Patel (born 19 /11/ 1943 Birth Place : Jamla,Himatnagar taluka, Dist- sabarkantha study : B.A - 1967 Hindi Gujarati , M.A - 1972 Hindi%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Sanskrit, M.Phil - 1984 Folklore : "Khedbhrma ane danta talukana dungaribhil adivasi oma gavata paoranik arelo : ek abhyas" Ph.d - 1990, 'khedbrama talukani pragatihasik sanskrutio' Awards : 1- 'Bhasha sanman', 1998, centerel sahitya akadami delhi.
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