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Original:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few ..  . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action ..  . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. .  . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people ..  . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
Revised:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few .. . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action .. . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. . . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people .. . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
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Original:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few ..  . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action ..  . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. .  . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people ..  . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
Revised:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few .. . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action .. . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. . . .2nd of all.. .. . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
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Original:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few ..  . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action ..  . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. .  . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people ..  . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
Revised:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few .. . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action .. . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. . . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people .. . .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
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Original:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few ..  . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action ..  . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. .  . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people ..  . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
Revised:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few .. . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action .. . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. . . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people .. . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. 
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Original:  . no matter what i say you cant stop me ..  . i hate plainfield south they are a bunch of power hungry witch hunters. .. 
Revised:  . no matter what i say you cant stop me .. . .. 
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Original: A 17-year-old student faces expulsion by the Plainfield School District , as a result of blog posts he made on xanga.com , which were critical of the school staff, alleging bullying and intimidation.
Revised: A 17-year-old student faces expulsion by the Plainfield School District as a result of blog posts he made on xanga.com , which were critical of the school staff, alleging bullying and intimidation.
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Original: A 17-year-old student faces expulsion by the Plainfield School District , as a result of blog posts he made on xanga.com , which were critical of the school staff, alleging bullying and intimidation.
Revised: A 17-year-old student faces expulsion by the Plainfield School District , as a result of blog posts he made on xanga.com which were critical of the school staff, alleging bullying and intimidation.
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Original:  On May 2nd, the student posted : Other students at the school posted messages of support in their own Xanga blogs : now that my brother isnt in school for the time being you must guess that everything is going to stop. ..your wrong...we dont stand down...as americans we have the right to speek our mind. ..as a matter of fact i think that im going to speek mine now on what i think about south...south is a school were they think that they have control over the world...wrong!
Revised:  On May 2nd, the student posted : Other students at the school posted messages of support in their own Xanga blogs now that my brother isnt in school for the time being you must guess that everything is going to stop. ..your wrong...we dont stand down...as americans we have the right to speek our mind. ..as a matter of fact i think that im going to speek mine now on what i think about south...south is a school were they think that they have control over the world...wrong!
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Original:  On May 2nd, the student posted : Other students at the school posted messages of support in their own Xanga blogs : now that my brother isnt in school for the time being you must guess that everything is going to stop. ..your wrong...we dont stand down...as americans we have the right to speek our mind. ..as a matter of fact i think that im going to speek mine now on what i think about south...south is a school were they think that they have control over the world...wrong!
Revised:  On May 2nd, the student posted : Other students at the school posted messages of support in their own Xanga blogs : now that my brother isnt in school for the time being you must guess that everything is going to stop. ..your wrong...we dont stand down...as americans we have the right to speak our mind. ..as a matter of fact i think that im going to speek mine now on what i think about south...south is a school were they think that they have control over the world...wrong!
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Original:  Meghan So I found out today that our school is watching peoples xanags and suspending and expelling people for it.....its fucking bullshit....1st of all....xanga is outside of school ... .its our own fucking personal stuff....2nd of all ... .the kid I heard about is possibly being expelled.... there was no threat towards anyone on his posts. ...so PSHS.....you can suck it.... Heather 
Revised:  Meghan So I found out today that our school is watching peoples xanags and suspending and expelling people for it.....its fucking bullshit....1st of all....xanga is outside of school ... second of all ... .the kid I heard about is possibly being expelled.... there was no threat towards anyone on his posts. ...so PSHS.....you can suck it.... Heather 
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Original:  Meghan So I found out today that our school is watching peoples xanags and suspending and expelling people for it.....its fucking bullshit....1st of all....xanga is outside of school ... .its our own fucking personal stuff....2nd of all ... .the kid I heard about is possibly being expelled.... there was no threat towards anyone on his posts. ...so PSHS.....you can suck it.... Heather 
Revised:  Meghan So I found out today that our school is watching peoples xanags and suspending and expelling people for it.....its fucking bullshit....1st of all....xanga is outside of school ... .its our own fucking personal stuff....2nd of all ... .the kid I heard about is possibly being expelled.... there was no threat towards anyone on his posts. " 
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Original:  dear plainfield school district 202: i know you read this. and you suck. suspend me or what ever you would like to do. but this is my fuckin web site and i can put what ever i want on it. kinda goes with the first amendment. by suspending kyle again for his xanga you guys are pathetic and totally irrational. first amendment you fucks. freedom of speech. and who the fuck are you to say what some one can do from there own personal computer. one more thing kiss my ass.   you are bully's.
Revised: " dear plainfield school district 202: i know you read this. and you suck. suspend me or what ever you would like to do. but this is my fuckin web site and i can put what ever i want on it. kinda goes with the first amendment. by suspending kyle again for his xanga you guys are pathetic and totally irrational. first amendment you fucks. freedom of speech. and who the fuck are you to say what some one can do from there own personal computer. one more thing kiss my ass. you are bully's.
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Original:  dear plainfield school district 202: i know you read this. and you suck. suspend me or what ever you would like to do. but this is my fuckin web site and i can put what ever i want on it. kinda goes with the first amendment. by suspending kyle again for his xanga you guys are pathetic and totally irrational. first amendment you fucks. freedom of speech. and who the fuck are you to say what some one can do from there own personal computer. one more thing kiss my ass.   you are bully's.
Revised:  dear plainfield school district 202: i know you read this. and you suck. suspend me or what ever you would like to do. but this is my fuckin web site and i can put what ever i want on it. kinda goes with the first amendment. by suspending kyle again for his xanga you guys are pathetic and totally irrational. first amendment you fucks. freedom of speech. and who the fuck are you to say what some one can do from there own personal computer. one more thing kiss my ass. " you are bully's.
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Original:  None of us ever put in our xanga's that they were going to kill or bring harm to any one. we voiced our opinions. you are the real threat here. you are depriving us of our right to learn. now stick that in your pipe and smoke it. 
Revised:  None of us ever put in our xanga's that they were going to kill or bring harm to any one. we voiced our opinions. you are the real threat here. you are depriving us of our right to learn. now stick that in your pipe and smoke it. "
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Original: Says attorney Carl Buck, who feels the school authories have overstepped their boundaries  : "The district is going to take away the student's education for exercising his freedom of speech...
Revised: Attorney Carl Buck, who feels the school authories have overstepped their boundaries : "The district is going to take away the student's education for exercising his freedom of speech...
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Original: Says attorney Carl Buck, who feels the school authories have overstepped their boundaries  : "The district is going to take away the student's education for exercising his freedom of speech...
Revised: Says attorney Carl Buck, who feels the school authories have overstepped their boundaries says : "The district is going to take away the student's education for exercising his freedom of speech...
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Original: A 17-year-old student faces expulsion by the Plainfield School District in Plainsfield , Illinois as a result of blog posts he made on xanga.com which were critical of the school staff, alleging bullying and intimidation.
Revised: A 17-year-old student faces expulsion by the Plainfield School District in Plainfield , Illinois as a result of blog posts he made on xanga.com which were critical of the school staff, alleging bullying and intimidation.
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Original: From Washington, DC, to New York City, trains powered by overhead electric lines are not moving due to what Amtrack is calling a "major power outage."
Revised: From Washington, DC, to New York City, trains powered by overhead electric lines are not moving due to what Amtrak is calling a "major power outage."
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Original:  While working to restore power, Amtrack is attempting to provide alternative transportation in the form of diesel locomotives and buses.
Revised:  While working to restore power, Amtrak is attempting to provide alternative transportation in the form of diesel locomotives and buses.
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Original: From Washington , DC, to New York City, trains powered by overhead electric lines stalled for more than two hours due to what Amtrak is calling a "major power outage."
Revised: From Washington D.C. to New York City, trains powered by overhead electric lines stalled for more than two hours due to what Amtrak is calling a "major power outage."
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Original:  Power was restored at 10:30 a.m. EST. Delays were expected to continue for much of the day.
Revised:  Power was restored at 10:30 a.m. EST. Delays continued for much of the day.
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Original:  Besides long-distance rail services such as Acela, local commuter trains in some areas are affected.
Revised:  Besides long-distance rail services such as Acela, local commuter trains were affected.
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Original:  Seven  lines in the Philadelphia area have been shut down, and five more are running shortened routes 
Revised:  Seven lines in the Philadelphia area were temporarily shut down, and five more are running shortened routes 
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Original: The lawsuit, filed in the United States District Court for the Central District of California by Torrentspy's parent company Valence Media and various employees, charges the MPAA with conspiracy, unlawful business practices, misappropriation of trade secrets and violations of the California Invasion of Privacy Act and the Electronic Communications Privacy Act of 1986.
Revised: The lawsuit, filed in the United States District Court for the Central District of California by Torrentspy's parent company Valence Media and various employees, charges the MPAA with conspiracy, unlawful business practices, misappropriation of trade secrets and violations of the California Invasion of Privacy Act and the Electronic Communications Privacy Act of 1985.
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Original:  According to the lawsuit, MPAA employee Dean Garfield paid a hacker US$15,000 to steal email correspondence and other sensitive information allegedly telling him that they "don't care how you get it"   
Revised:  According to the lawsuit, MPAA employee Dean Garfield paid a hacker US$15,000 to steal email correspondence and other sensitive information allegedly telling him that they "don't care how you get it" . 
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Original:  In an interview with CNET, Kori Bernards, the vice-president of the MPAA, called the allegations "false" and implied that TorrentSpy might want to deflect from the MPAA's own lawsuits against the site
Revised:  In an interview with CNET, Kori Bernards, the vice-president of the MPAA, called the allegations "false" and implied that TorrentSpy might be trying to deflect attention from the MPAA's own lawsuits against the site
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Original:  Currently, Operation Astute's tasks are cited as: Australian forces are already actively working to achieve these tasks.
Revised:  Currently, Operation Astute's tasks are claimed as: Australian forces are already actively working to achieve these tasks.
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Original:  Currently, Operation Astute's tasks are cited as: Australian forces are already actively working to achieve these tasks.
Revised:  Currently, Operation Astute's tasks are cited as: 
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Original:  The Blackhawks have also been operating missions above the hills around Dili to seek out and communicate a strong presence to the rebel soldiers.
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Original:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which has undoubtedly risen due to the fact flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport . Complicating the situation however, are events involving East Timor's government.
Revised:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which has undoubtedly risen due to the fact flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport Complicating the situation however, are events involving East Timor's government.
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Original:  Malaysia has now sent 25 military officers ahead of its 500 strong commitment of military and police personnel , New Zealand has  an infantry company  on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement and Portugal's 120-strong commitment has commenced preparations, but is not expected to arrive for a matter of weeks.
Revised:  Malaysia has now sent 25 military officers ahead of its 500 strong commitment of military and police personnel ; New Zealand has an infantry company on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement and Portugal's 120-strong commitment has commenced preparations, but is not expected to arrive for a matter of weeks.
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Original:  Malaysia has now sent 25 military officers ahead of its 500 strong commitment of military and police personnel , New Zealand has  an infantry company  on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement and Portugal's 120-strong commitment has commenced preparations, but is not expected to arrive for a matter of weeks.
Revised:  Malaysia has now sent 25 military officers ahead of its 500 strong commitment of military and police personnel , New Zealand has an infantry company on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement ; Portugal's 120-strong commitment has commenced preparations, but is not expected to arrive for a matter of weeks.
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Original:  Currently,  Operation Astute's tasks are claimed as:  Infantry patrols are operating in the area, supported by the four Blackhawks from the 5th Aviation Regiment which have arrived so far.
Revised:  Currently, Operation Astute's tasks as: Infantry patrols are operating in the area, supported by the four Blackhawks from the 5th Aviation Regiment which have arrived so far.
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Original:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which has undoubtedly risen due to the fact flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport   .
Revised:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which is rising due to the fact flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport .
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Original:  Malaysia, New Zealand and Portugal have also begun their deployments .  Malaysia has now sent 25 military officers ahead of its 500 strong commitment of military and police personnel ;
Revised:  Malaysia, New Zealand and Portugal have also begun their deployments . Malaysia has now sent 25 military officers ahead of its 500 strong commitment of military and police personnel ,
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Original:  New Zealand has committed two C-130s, and an infantry company is on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement ;
Revised:  New Zealand has an infantry company is on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement ;
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Original:  New Zealand has committed two C-130s, and an infantry company is on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement ;
Revised:  New Zealand has committed two C-130s, and an infantry company on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement ;
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Original:  New Zealand has committed two C-130s, and an infantry company is on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement ;
Revised:  New Zealand has committed two C-130s, and an infantry company is on standby pending negotiations over rules of engagement and
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Original:  Currently, the Australian Department of Defence states Operation Astute's tasks are  : Australian forces are already actively working to achieve these tasks.
Revised:  Currently, Operation Astute's tasks are : Australian forces are already actively working to achieve these tasks.
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Original:  Currently, the Australian Department of Defence states Operation Astute's tasks are  : Australian forces are already actively working to achieve these tasks.
Revised:  Currently, the Australian Department of Defence states Operation Astute's tasks are : 
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Original:  Blackhawks have also been operating missions above the hills around Dili to seek out rebel positions and communicate a strong presence to the rebel soldiers.
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Original:  Two Armoured Personnel Carriers and an infantry platoon have set up position in and around the UN Headquarters and Dili police station, which came under attack earlier today, and was the location of considerable violence yesterday when East Timorese army soldiers killed 12 East Timorese police and wounded numerous others, including 2 UN personnel . "At the moment things are relatively stable, the troops are arriving and we are establishing good control throughout the Dili area"
Revised:  Two Armoured Personnel Carriers and an infantry platoon have set up position in and around the UN Headquarters and Dili police station, which came under attack earlier today, and was the location of considerable violence yesterday . "At the moment things are relatively stable, the troops are arriving and we are establishing good control throughout the Dili area"
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Original:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which is rising due to the fact flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport . Approximately 800 Australian nationals were in East Timor at the beginning of conflict.
Revised:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which has undoubtedly risen due to the fact flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport . Approximately 800 Australian nationals were in East Timor at the beginning of conflict.
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Original:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which is rising due to the fact flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport . Approximately 800 Australian nationals were in East Timor at the beginning of conflict.
Revised:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which is rising due to the fact flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport 
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Original:  Currently,  Operation Astute's tasks are claimed as :  Infantry patrols are operating in the area, supported by the four Blackhawks from the 5th Aviation Regiment which have arrived so far.
Revised:  Currently, Operation Astute's tasks are : Infantry patrols are operating in the area, supported by the four Blackhawks from the 5th Aviation Regiment which have arrived so far.
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Original:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which has undoubtedly risen due to the fact flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport   .
Revised:  Yesterday 80 Australian nationals were evacuated by RAAF C-130, a number which is rising as flights in and out of East Timor have been unhampered since the securing of Comoro airport .
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Original:  This was one of the  severe attacks of the FARC in the last years.
Revised:  This was one of the most severe attacks of the FARC in the last years.
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Original:  This was one of the  severe attacks of the FARC in the last years.
Revised:  This was one of the severe attacks of the FARC in last years.
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