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Original:  In August another deadly incident rsulting from a stampede occurred in the second day of a nine-day religious festival at the Naina Devi Temple in Himachal Pradesh state;
Revised:  In August another deadly incident resulting from a stampede occurred in the second day of a nine-day religious festival at the Naina Devi Temple in Himachal Pradesh state;
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Original:  Another incident in January 2005 saw more then 250 Hindu worshipers killed in a stampede near a remote temple in the state of Maharashtra
Revised:  Another incident in January 2005 saw more then 250 Hindu worshippers killed in a stampede near a remote temple in the state of Maharashtra
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Original: <div style="float:right;clear:right;"><div> Image:George Bush speaking on the economy - September 30, 2008.png|George Bush making the statement at 12:45 UTC today.
Revised:  Image:George Bush speaking on the economy - September 30, 2008.png|George Bush making the statement at 12:45 UTC today.
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Original:  But to put that in perspective, the drop in the stock market yesterday represented more than a trillion dollars in losses.  
Revised:  But to put that in perspective, the drop in the stock market yesterday represented more than a trillion dollars in losses. " 
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Original: If passed, the bailout plan would have allowed for the United States government to purchase devalued mortgage backed securities, resulting from the subprime mortgage crisis  from troubled financial institutions.
Revised: If passed, the bailout plan would have allowed for the United States government to purchase devalued mortgage backed securities, resulting from the subprime mortgage crisis , from troubled financial institutions.
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Original:  The US Treasury Secretary Henry Paulson has said that the plan could cost up to $700 billion
Revised:  The US Treasury Secretary Henry Paulson said the plan could cost up to $700 billion
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Original: "Yesterday, the House of Representatives voted on a financial rescue plan that had been negotiated by Congressional leaders of both parties and my administration," Bushe reminded the audience.
Revised: "Yesterday, the House of Representatives voted on a financial rescue plan that had been negotiated by Congressional leaders of both parties and my administration," Bush reminded the audience.
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Original:  The Kyodo correspondence agency reported that all fifteen of the dead had been in a video store on the first floor  .
Revised:  The Kyodo correspondence agency reported that all fifteen of the dead had been in a video store on the first floor of the building .
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Original:  The  shop had 32 cubicles for watching videos, all of which were equipped with a bed, television, and video deck.
Revised:  The sex shop had 32 cubicles for watching videos, all of which were equipped with a bed, television, and video deck.
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Original:  A customer, who fled to safety when the fire started, said to  media that the inside of shop was dark, and that he had difficulty seeing where he was going as he escaped  
Revised:  A customer, who fled to safety when the fire started, said to the media that the inside of shop was dark, and that he had difficulty seeing where he was going as he escaped 
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Original:  A customer, who fled to safety when the fire started, said to  media that the inside of shop was dark, and that he had difficulty seeing where he was going as he escaped  
Revised:  A customer, who fled to safety when the fire started, said to media that the inside of shop was dark, and that he had difficulty seeing where he was going as he escaped . 
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Original:  According to authorities, all of the fatalities were in private viewing rooms in a video sex shop that was located on the first floor of the building.
Revised:  According to authorities, all of the fatalities were in private viewing rooms in a video shop that was located on the first floor of the building.
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Original:  The cause of the fire is not yet know
Revised:  The cause of the fire is not yet known
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Original:  It is hard to tell how many voters in my particular riding are accessing the a
Revised:  It is hard to tell how many voters in my particular riding are accessing the ad
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Original:  According to her her biography on their website, "her primary issues include Municipal Animal Control by-law matters, endangered species legislation and hunting issues."
Revised:  According to her biography on their website, "her primary issues include Municipal Animal Control by-law matters, endangered species legislation and hunting issues."
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Original:  All interviews are conducted over e-mail, and interviews are published unedited, allowing candidates to impart their full message to our readers, uninterrupted.
Revised:  All interviews are conducted via e-mail, and interviews are published unedited, allowing candidates to impart their full message to our readers, uninterrupted.
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Original:  Granting women the right to vote was considered a radical initiative as expressed in the article Human Rights in Canada, A Historical Perpsective, "The men in control of the country perceived women as a "weaker sex" needing protection and guidance.
Revised:  Granting women the right to vote was considered a radical initiative as expressed in the article Human Rights in Canada, A Historical Perpsective, "The men in control of the country perceived women as a 'weaker sex' needing protection and guidance.
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Original:  A generation of women - led by dynamos like Nellie McClung, Emily Murphy, Ada Powers, Josephine Dandurand and Elizabeth Smith Shortt -have lobbied, cajoled, heckled, and ridiculed politicians for denying them their rights.
Revised:  A generation of women - led by dynamos like Nellie McClung, Emily Murphy, Ada Powers, Josephine Dandurand and Elizabeth Smith Shortt - have lobbied, cajoled, heckled, and ridiculed politicians for denying them their rights.
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Original: The Animal Alliance Environment Voters Party of Canada was formed to bring forward the prinicple  of just and equitable human progress that respects, protects and enhances the environment upon which we all depend and the lives of the animals with whom we share our world.
Revised: The Animal Alliance Environment Voters Party of Canada was formed to bring forward the prinicple sic of just and equitable human progress that respects, protects and enhances the environment upon which we all depend and the lives of the animals with whom we share our world.
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Original:  My riding presents significant opportunities to reclaim biologocial  diversity, create wildlife corridors, to address and prevent human wildlife conflict and to re-naturalize habitat long lost to industrial use.
Revised:  My riding presents significant opportunities to reclaim biologocial sic diversity, create wildlife corridors, to address and prevent human wildlife conflict and to re-naturalize habitat long lost to industrial use.
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Original:  Granting women the right to vote was considered a radical initiative as expressed in the article Human Rights in Canada, A Historical Perpsective  , "The men in control of the country perceived women as a 'weaker sex' needing protection and guidance.
Revised:  Granting women the right to vote was considered a radical initiative as expressed in the article Human Rights in Canada, A Historical Perpsective sic , "The men in control of the country perceived women as a 'weaker sex' needing protection and guidance.
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Original:  The Animal Alliance Environment Voters Party of Canada was formed because of a Supreme Court  ruling which prevented "third parties" (not registered political parties) from speaking out effectively at election time.
Revised:  The Animal Alliance Environment Voters Party of Canada was formed because of a Supreme Court ourt ruling which prevented "third parties" (not registered political parties) from speaking out effectively at election time.
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Original:  There are many people here that appreciate and respect other animals and and to see more done to reduce humans' impact on the environemt  and have a safe, respectful future for their children.
Revised:  There are many people here that appreciate and respect other animals and and to see more done to reduce humans' impact on the environemt sic and have a safe, respectful future for their children.
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Original:  I have worked on several election campaigns for a couple of noteable  politicians, and Aimal Alliance in itself is a legislative organization that I have been a part of for many years.
Revised:  I have worked on several election campaigns for a couple of noteable sic politicians, and Aimal Alliance in itself is a legislative organization that I have been a part of for many years.
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Original:  By doing so, compassion for other animals and respect for eachother  and the environment will surely follow.
Revised:  By doing so, compassion for other animals and respect for eachother sic and the environment will surely follow.
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Original:  In this riding we have many people opposed to the "big "box" stores moving in to the area, of which I would actively attempt to allow only smaller family or entrepreneur-owned businessed  to move in to the area.
Revised:  In this riding we have many people opposed to the "big "box" stores moving in to the area, of which I would actively attempt to allow only smaller family or entrepreneur-owned businessed sic to move in to the area.
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Original: 250px|caption |Professor David Keith in front of the carbon capture towerProfessor David Keith, Director of University of Calgary's (UofC) Institute for Sustainable Energy, Environment and Economy (ISEEE) and a team of researchers from UofC's Energy and Environmental Systems Group built and operated a prototype system this summer producing results that compared favourably with commercial carbon capture systems.
Revised: Professor David Keith, Director of University of Calgary's (UofC) Institute for Sustainable Energy, Environment and Economy (ISEEE) and a team of researchers from UofC's Energy and Environmental Systems Group built and operated a prototype system this summer producing results that compared favourably with commercial carbon capture systems.
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Original: “While it’ s important to get started doing things we know how to do, like wind power nuclear power and ‘regular’ carbon capture and storage," Professor Keith continues, "it ’ s also vital to start thinking about radical new ideas and approaches to solving this problem.
Revised: "While it' s important to get started doing things we know how to do, like wind power nuclear power and ‘regular’ carbon capture and storage," Professor Keith continues, "it ’ s also vital to start thinking about radical new ideas and approaches to solving this problem.
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Original: “While it’ s important to get started doing things we know how to do, like wind power nuclear power and ‘regular’ carbon capture and storage," Professor Keith continues, "it ’ s also vital to start thinking about radical new ideas and approaches to solving this problem.
Revised: “While it’ s important to get started doing things we know how to do, like wind power nuclear power and 'regular' carbon capture and storage," Professor Keith continues, "it ’ s also vital to start thinking about radical new ideas and approaches to solving this problem.
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Original: “While it’ s important to get started doing things we know how to do, like wind power nuclear power and ‘regular’ carbon capture and storage," Professor Keith continues, "it ’ s also vital to start thinking about radical new ideas and approaches to solving this problem.
Revised: “While it’ s important to get started doing things we know how to do, like wind power nuclear power and ‘regular’ carbon capture and storage," Professor Keith continues, "it ' s also vital to start thinking about radical new ideas and approaches to solving this problem.
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Original:  ” ISEEE ’ s Executive Director David Layzell points out that "energy-efficient and cost-effective air capture could play a valuable role in complementing other approaches for reducing emissions from the transportation sector, such as biofuels or electric vehicles.
Revised:  " ISEEE ’ s Executive Director David Layzell points out that "energy-efficient and cost-effective air capture could play a valuable role in complementing other approaches for reducing emissions from the transportation sector, such as biofuels or electric vehicles.
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Original:  ” ISEEE ’ s Executive Director David Layzell points out that "energy-efficient and cost-effective air capture could play a valuable role in complementing other approaches for reducing emissions from the transportation sector, such as biofuels or electric vehicles.
Revised:  ” ISEEE ' s Executive Director David Layzell points out that "energy-efficient and cost-effective air capture could play a valuable role in complementing other approaches for reducing emissions from the transportation sector, such as biofuels or electric vehicles.
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Original:  Bobby a teacher at the school thinks that this will fail.
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Original: A recent study suggests that hurricane intensity may be linked to  number of sunspots.
Revised: A recent study suggests that hurricane intensity may be linked to the number of sunspots.
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Original:  "This is something worth investigating, but they made too many assumptions for me to just accept their conclusion at this point," says Judy Curry of Georgia Institute of Technology in Atlanta
Revised:  "This is something worth investigating, but they made too many assumptions for me to just accept their conclusion at this point," says Judy Curry of Georgia Institute of Technology , Atlanta
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Original:  This therefore would mean more intense hurricanes on earth.
Revised:  This may point to increased hurricane intensity on earth.
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Original:  Less the number of sunspots , more will be the intensityof hurricanes . James Elsner and Thomas Jagger of Florida State University in Tallahassee after examining the past 100 year hurricane record of the United States and Caribbean , conclude that their intensity may be linked to 10 to 12 year solar magnetic activity cycles.
Revised:  Less the number of sunspots may be related to increase in hurricane intensity . James Elsner and Thomas Jagger of Florida State University in Tallahassee after examining the past 100 year hurricane record of the United States and Caribbean , conclude that their intensity may be linked to 10 to 12 year solar magnetic activity cycles.
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Original:  Less the number of sunspots , more will be the intensityof hurricanes . James Elsner and Thomas Jagger of Florida State University in Tallahassee after examining the past 100 year hurricane record of the United States and Caribbean , conclude that their intensity may be linked to 10 to 12 year solar magnetic activity cycles.
Revised:  Less the number of sunspots , more will be the intensityof hurricanes . James Elsner and Thomas Jagger of Florida State University in Tallahassee after examining the past 100 year hurricane record of the United States and Caribbean conclude that their intensity may be linked to 10 to 12 year solar magnetic activity cycles.
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Original:  Sunspots are areas in sun with increased magnetic activity , that increase and decrease in number over time .
Revised:  Sunspots are areas in sun with increased magnetic activity . The number of sunspots vary during the solar cycles .
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Original:  This may point to increased hurricane intensity on earth.
Revised:  This decrease in the number of sunspots may related to increased hurricane intensity on earth.
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Original:  The present study indicates that there will a 10 \% decrease in hurricanes for an increase in 100 sunspots.
Revised:  The present study indicates that there will a 10 \% decrease in hurricanes for an increase of 100 sunspots.
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Original:  James Elsner and Thomas Jagger of Florida State University in Tallahassee after examining the past 100 year hurricane record of the United States and Caribbean conclude that their intensity may be linked to 10 to 12 year solar magnetic activity cycles.
Revised:  James Elsner and Thomas Jagger of Florida State University in Tallahassee after examining the past 100 year hurricane records of the United States and Caribbean conclude that their intensity may be linked to 10 to 12 year solar magnetic activity cycles.
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Original:    Other scientists however question the statistical basis of the study and the physical processes attributed to changes in hurricane activity.
Revised:  Establishing a link between sunspots and hurricane intensity can provide a valuable tool for predicting storms. Other scientists however question the statistical basis of the study and the physical processes attributed to changes in hurricane activity.
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Original:  Decrease in the number of sunspots may be related to  increase in hurricane intensity.
Revised:  Decrease in the number of sunspots may be related to an increase in hurricane intensity.
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Original:  Sunspots are areas in sun with increased magnetic activity.
Revised:  Sunspots are areas on the Sun with increased magnetic activity.
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Original:  The number of sunspots is predicted by NOAA to  be the lowest in 2008 in a 11 year cycle.
Revised:  The number of sunspots is predicted by NOAA to be the lowest in an 11 year cycle.
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Original:  This decrease in the number of sunspots may related to increased hurricane intensity on earth.
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Original:  Increased solar activity will allow more ultraviolet rays to reach earth, that can warm the relatively colder upper atmosphere.
Revised:  Increased solar activity will allow more ultraviolet rays to reach Earth, resulting in warming of the relatively colder upper atmosphere.
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Original:  This decreases the temperature difference between the upper and lower regions of the atmosphere.
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Original:  More the temperature difference between upper and lower atmospheric regions, the higher will be the hurricane intensity.
Revised:  It is believed that the greater the temperature difference between upper and lower atmospheric regions, the higher will be the hurricane intensity.
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Original:  More the temperature difference between upper and lower atmospheric regions, the higher will be the hurricane intensity.
Revised:  More the temperature difference between upper and lower atmospheric regions, the higher the hurricane intensity.
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Original:  It is noted at URL that "On 10/1/2008, the Senate plans to use H.R.1424 as the vehicle for the economic rescue legislation.
Revised:  It is noted at URL that "On 10/1/2008, the Senate passed H.R.1424 as the vehicle for the economic rescue legislation.
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Original: The U.S. Senate passed the new, revised bailout bill designed to help the struggling U.S. financial economy, which has measures nearly identitical to the bill rejected by the U.S. House of Representatives on Monday.
Revised: The U.S. Senate passed a revised bailout bill designed to help the struggling U.S. financial economy, which has measures nearly identitical to the bill rejected by the U.S. House of Representatives on Monday.
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Original: The U.S. Senate passed the new, revised bailout bill designed to help the struggling U.S. financial economy, which has measures nearly identitical to the bill rejected by the U.S. House of Representatives on Monday.
Revised: The U.S. Senate passed the new, revised bailout bill designed to help the struggling U.S. financial economy, which has measures nearly identical to the bill rejected by the U.S. House of Representatives on Monday.
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Original:  The new bill does include The new revisions include raising the FDIC insurance cap to $250,000, a move designed to please progressives.
Revised:  The new revisions include raising the FDIC insurance cap to $250,000, a move designed to please progressives.
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Original:  But its the $ 110 Billion in tax breaks and so-called pork , not offset by any increases in revenues , which has added opposition to the bill from some Representatives in the House.
Revised:  But its the $ 110 billion in tax breaks and so-called pork , not offset by any increases in revenues , which has added opposition to the bill from some Representatives in the House.
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Original:  But its the $ 110 Billion in tax breaks and so-called pork , not offset by any increases in revenues , which has added opposition to the bill from some Representatives in the House.
Revised:  But its the $ 110 Billion in tax breaks and so-called pork , not offset by any increases in revenues and has added opposition to the bill from some Representatives in the House.
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Original:    "    The inclusion of parity, tax extenders and the FDIC increases has caused me to reconsider my position," said Representative Jim Ramstad (R Minnesota), who voted against the previous bill on Monday.
Revised:  " " The inclusion of parity, tax extenders and the FDIC increases has caused me to reconsider my position," said Representative Jim Ramstad (R Minnesota), who voted against the previous bill on Monday.
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Original:  It is noted on  Congressional website that "On 10/1/2008, the Senate passed H.R.1424 as the vehicle for the economic rescue legislation.
Revised:  It is noted on the Congressional website that "On 10/1/2008, the Senate passed H.R.1424 as the vehicle for the economic rescue legislation.
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Original:  It is noted on the Congressional website that "On 10/1/2008, the Senate passed H.R.1424 as the vehicle for the economic rescue legislation.
Revised:  It is noted on the Congressional Website that "On 10/1/2008, the Senate passed H.R.1424 as the vehicle for the economic rescue legislation.
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Original:  The U.S. Senate passed a revised bailout bill designed to help the struggling U.S. financial economy, which has measures nearly identical to the bill rejected by the U.S. House of Representatives on Monday.
Revised: = The U.S. Senate passed a revised bailout bill designed to help the struggling U.S. financial economy, which has measures nearly identical to the bill rejected by the U.S. House of Representatives on Monday.
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Original:  It was passed with 74 Yeas and 25 nays.
Revised:  It was passed with 74 yeas and 25 nays.
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Original:  With wage earners keeping 25 to 35 percent of their income instead of the government taking it in income tax, the 18 to 23 percent will be more than affordable    
Revised:  With wage earners keeping 25 to 35 percent of their income instead of the government taking it in income tax, the 18 to 23 percent will be more than affordable . 
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Original:  They worked for my maternal grandparents, who immigrated from Lithuania around 1900   
Revised:  They worked for my maternal grandparents, who immigrated from Lithuania around 1900. 
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Original:  More troops will be needed and more international cooperation to wipe out this societal cancer                         
Revised:  More troops will be needed and more international cooperation to wipe out this societal cancer . 
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Original: Donald K. Allen: f you think the safe thing to do Nov. 4 is vote for the Republican or Democratic candidate of your "choice," then you are sadly mistaken.
Revised: Donald K. Allen: If you think the safe thing to do Nov. 4 is vote for the Republican or Democratic candidate of your "choice," then you are sadly mistaken.
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