wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  We know what they ate, what tools they used, where they settled ( on colony each on ‘Uiha, Kauvai, and Foa, and two on Lifuka), and how large the settlements were.
Revised:  We know what they ate, what tools they used, where they settled ( one colony each on ‘Uiha, Kauvai, and Foa, and two on Lifuka), and how large the settlements were.
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Original:  Despite a wealth of archaeological evidence, however, the Lapita people still stifle us with two main mysteries: How  they spread through the South Pacific so quickly, and why  the Lapita settlers in Tonga quickly abandoned their ornate pottery tradition?
Revised:  Despite a wealth of archaeological evidence, however, the Lapita people still stifle us with two main mysteries: How did they spread through the South Pacific so quickly, and why the Lapita settlers in Tonga quickly abandoned their ornate pottery tradition?
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Original:  Despite a wealth of archaeological evidence, however, the Lapita people still stifle us with two main mysteries: How  they spread through the South Pacific so quickly, and why  the Lapita settlers in Tonga quickly abandoned their ornate pottery tradition?
Revised:  Despite a wealth of archaeological evidence, however, the Lapita people still stifle us with two main mysteries: How they spread through the South Pacific so quickly, and why did the Lapita settlers in Tonga quickly abandoned their ornate pottery tradition?
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Original:  Despite a wealth of archaeological evidence, however, the Lapita people still stifle us with two main mysteries: How  they spread through the South Pacific so quickly, and why  the Lapita settlers in Tonga quickly abandoned their ornate pottery tradition?
Revised:  Despite a wealth of archaeological evidence, however, the Lapita people still stifle us with two main mysteries: How they spread through the South Pacific so quickly, and why the Lapita settlers in Tonga quickly abandon their ornate pottery tradition?
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Original:  If the hypothesis is correct, then there must have been some strong sibling rivalry to entice someone to fall upon places as far away as New Zealand, Hawai’i , and Easter Island.
Revised:  If the hypothesis is correct, then there must have been some strong sibling rivalry to entice someone to fall upon places as far away as New Zealand, Hawaiʻi , and Easter Island.
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Original:  The Polynesian Plain ware Period: 2650–1550 BP (700 BCE – 400 AD) Life began to change drastically for Ha’apaians at the same time that ornate pottery was replaced by a strictly utilitarian plain ware kit, and it is at this time that the people may be called Polynesian.
Revised:  The Polynesian Plain ware Period: 2650–1550 BP (700 BCE – 400 AD) Life began to change drastically for Haʻapaians at the same time that ornate pottery was replaced by a strictly utilitarian plain ware kit, and it is at this time that the people may be called Polynesian.
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Original:  Tongatapu may have been politically consolidated by a single individual of the future Tu’i Tonga familial line, as oral tradition traces the king’s lineage back through 39 individuals that could have started as early as 1000 bp (950 AD).
Revised:  Tongatapu may have been politically consolidated by a single individual of the future Tuʻi Tonga familial line, as oral tradition traces the king’s lineage back through 39 individuals that could have started as early as 1000 bp (950 AD).
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Original: The Lapita Period Around 2850 B.C. , the Lapita people reached Tonga, and carbon dating places their landfall first in Tongatapu and then in Haʻapai soon after.
Revised: The Lapita Period Around 2850 BP , the Lapita people reached Tonga, and carbon dating places their landfall first in Tongatapu and then in Haʻapai soon after.
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Original: Mu Pai Nai was a Manchu leader who invaded the north of Joseon, but was defeated by Yi Sun Shin and his army in 1583.
Revised: Mu Pai Nai was a Manchu leader who invaded the north of Joseon, but was defeated by Yi Sun-sin and his army in 1583.
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Original:  Right after his capture, he was executed by Yi Sun Shin . Despite his real name, the Koreans still refer to him as a Jurchen (Hangul: 여진족 Hanja:女眞族).
Revised:  Right after his capture, he was executed by Yi Sun-sin . Despite his real name, the Koreans still refer to him as a Jurchen (Hangul: 여진족 Hanja:女眞族).
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Original:  Despite his real name, the Koreans still refer to him as a Jurchen (Hangul: 여진족 Hanja:女眞族).
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Original:  In 1970, Gladney's campus in Fort Worthincluded an on-campus middle school and high school operated by the Fort Worth Independent School District, with dormitories, hospital facilities and a career-development program and apartment living center for older women.
Revised:  In 1970, Gladney's campus in Fort Worth included an on-campus middle school and high school operated by the Fort Worth Independent School District, with dormitories, hospital facilities and a career-development program and apartment living center for older women.
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Original: Mark Melson, Gladney President and CEO | Gladney Dad On December 1, 2017, the Gladney Center of Adoption announced the appointment of Mark Melson to be the institution's president and CEO.
Revised: Mark Melson, Gladney President and CEO | Mark Melson On December 1, 2017, the Gladney Center of Adoption announced the appointment of Mark Melson to be the institution's president and CEO.
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Original:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
Revised:  2021 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
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Original:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
Revised:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chair Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
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Original:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
Revised:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
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Original:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
Revised:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
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Original:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
Revised:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
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Original:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Kathleen Marsal Hiry West Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
Revised:  Gladney Center for Adoption 2019–2020 Board of Directors Mark McLeland, Chairman Mary Beth Dudley Stacey Reynolds Laura Wheat, Chair-Elect Carolyn Hood Anne Reysa Christopher Dezzi, Past Chair Robin Kochel Paige McCoy Smith Kenneth Heitner, Secretary Adrian Liddiard Ashley Stern James Unger, Treasurer Mark Melson, President Roger Metz Marshall Bush Tammy Miller Greg Castanias Barbara Penshorn John Covington Stephanie Perdue
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Original: Binucleated cells can be observed using microscopy.
Revised: Sudarshan Yadav ji ne eshe likha haiBinucleated cells can be observed using microscopy.
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Original: ]] In cancer cells, it has been observed that the formation of the spindles comes before when com pared to the chromosomes.
Revised: ]] In cancer cells, it has been observed that the formation of the spindles comes before when compared to the chromosomes.
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Original:  Due to this the prophase stage is briefer allowing metaphase to occur in advance.
Revised:  Because the prophase stage is briefer allowing metaphase to occur in advance.
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Original:  Due to this the prophase stage is briefer allowing metaphase to occur in advance.
Revised:  Due to this the prophase stage is brief, it allows metaphase to occur in advance.
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Original:  Chromosomes then are unable to reach the metaphase plate and are stranded behind.
Revised:  Chromosomes then are unable to reach the metaphase plate are stranded behind.
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Original:  These chromosomes still have asters attached  them and when met with other asters, multiple spindles are formed .
Revised:  These chromosomes still have asters attached to them and when met with other asters, multiple spindles are formed .
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Original:  These chromosomes still have asters attached  them and when met with other asters, multiple spindles are formed .
Revised:  These chromosomes still have asters attached them and when met with other asters, form multiple spindles .
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Original:  When anaphase occurs in these cells, the chromosomes are separated abnormally and results in aneuploidy of both daughter cells.
Revised:  When anaphase occurs in these cells, the chromosomes are abnormally separated and result in aneuploidy of both daughter cells.
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Original: On February 15, 1963, Wright reportedly changed his plea from Innocent to No Contest to the charge of murder, in order to evade a jury trial that could have resulted in the death penalty.
Revised: On February 15, 1963, Wright reportedly changed his plea from Innocent to No Contest to the charge of murder, in order to avoid a jury trial that could have resulted in the death penalty.
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Original:  Category:1943 births Category:African-American people Category:American emigrants to Portugal Category:American escapees Category:American people convicted of murder Category:American robbers Category:Black Liberation Army Category:Escapees from New Jersey detention Category: Fugitives Category:Fugitives wanted by the United States Category:Hijackers Category:Living people Category:People convicted of murder by New Jersey Category:People from Detroit Category:People from Halifax, Virgin
Revised:  Category:1943 births Category:African-American people Category:American emigrants to Portugal Category:American escapees Category:American people convicted of murder Category:American robbers Category:Black Liberation Army Category:Escapees from New Jersey detention Category: Formerly wanted fugitives Category:Fugitives wanted by the United States Category:Hijackers Category:Living people Category:People convicted of murder by New Jersey Category:People from Detroit Category:People from Halifax, Virgin
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Original:  On September 26, 2011, he was arrested in Portugal.
Revised:  On September 26, 2011, Wright was arrested in Portugal.
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Original:  The FBI requested Wright's extradition from Portugal to the United States, but  was denied on the grounds that Wright is a Portuguese citizen.
Revised:  The FBI requested his extradition from Portugal to the United States, but was denied on the grounds that Wright is a Portuguese citizen.
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Original:  The FBI requested Wright's extradition from Portugal to the United States, but  was denied on the grounds that Wright is a Portuguese citizen.
Revised:  The FBI requested Wright's extradition from Portugal to the United States, but the request was denied on the grounds that Wright is a Portuguese citizen.
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Original:   New Jersey offenses On February 15, 1963, Wright reportedly changed his plea from Innocent to No Contest to the charge of murder, in order to avoid a jury trial that could have resulted in the death penalty.
Revised:  New Jersey offenses On February 15, 1963, Wright reportedly changed his plea from innocent to no contest to the charge of murder, in order to avoid a jury trial that could have resulted in the death penalty.
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Original:  Wright was subsequently sentenced to 15 to 30 years ' incarceration . Escape from prison On August 19, 1970, between 10p.m. and 11p.m., after serving over 7 years and 6 months of his sentence, Wright joined three inmates and "just walked out" between bed checks from a state prison farm at Leesburg State Prison, now known as the Bayside State Prison in Leesburg, New Jersey.
Revised:  Wright was subsequently sentenced to 15 to 30 years in prison . Escape from prison On August 19, 1970, between 10p.m. and 11p.m., after serving over 7 years and 6 months of his sentence, Wright joined three inmates and "just walked out" between bed checks from a state prison farm at Leesburg State Prison, now known as the Bayside State Prison in Leesburg, New Jersey.
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Original:  Allegedly they stole the prison warden's car to get away.
Revised:  They allegedly stole the prison warden's car to get away.
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Original:  The pilot of the hijacked Detroit-Miami flight, Captain William Harold May, then 41  and a 20-year Delta employee, said Wright was the group's leader.
Revised:  The pilot of the hijacked Detroit-Miami flight, Captain William Harold May, then 41 , and a 20-year Delta employee, said Wright was the group's leader.
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Original:  1 million in ransom money to the U.S.  After the hijackers' calls to have the ransom money restored to them were ignored by the Algerian government, Wright and his associates disappeared.
Revised:  1 million in ransom money to the U.S. . After the hijackers' calls to have the ransom money restored to them were ignored by the Algerian government, Wright and his associates disappeared.
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Original:  Allegedly  in early 1973, the group traveled by ship to France and lived and worked there with new identities.
Revised:  Allegedly , in early 1973, the group traveled by ship to France and lived and worked there with new identities.
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Original:  Apprehension and refused extradition of accomplices On May 26, 1976, Wright's four associates were located in Paris and arrested by the French National Police for carrying false U.S. passports.
Revised:  Apprehension and refused extradition of accomplices On May 26, 1976, Wright's four associates were located in Paris and arrested by the National Police for carrying false U.S. passports.
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Original:  Facing extradition to the United States, the four issued an appeal to the French people on October 11, 1976, claiming that while they were "ready to face the consequences of our act," they could not expect a fair trial in America and "would be condemned to spend the rest of our days in infernal prisons . "  French authorities declined the American extradition request in November 1976, holding the four defendants in the Fleury-Mérogis prison , awaiting trial on hijacking charges.
Revised:  Facing extradition to the United States, the four issued an appeal to the French people on October 11, 1976, claiming that while they were "ready to face the consequences of our act," they could not expect a fair trial in America and "would be condemned to spend the rest of our days in infernal prisons " French authorities declined the American extradition request in November 1976, holding the four defendants in the Fleury-Mérogis prison , awaiting trial on hijacking charges.
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Original:  Facing extradition to the United States, the four issued an appeal to the French people on October 11, 1976, claiming that while they were "ready to face the consequences of our act," they could not expect a fair trial in America and "would be condemned to spend the rest of our days in infernal prisons . "  French authorities declined the American extradition request in November 1976, holding the four defendants in the Fleury-Mérogis prison , awaiting trial on hijacking charges.
Revised:  Facing extradition to the United States, the four issued an appeal to the French people on October 11, 1976, claiming that while they were "ready to face the consequences of our act," they could not expect a fair trial in America and "would be condemned to spend the rest of our days in infernal prisons . " . French authorities declined the American extradition request in November 1976, holding the four defendants in the Fleury-Mérogis prison , awaiting trial on hijacking charges.
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Original:  Facing extradition to the United States, the four issued an appeal to the French people on October 11, 1976, claiming that while they were "ready to face the consequences of our act," they could not expect a fair trial in America and "would be condemned to spend the rest of our days in infernal prisons . "  French authorities declined the American extradition request in November 1976, holding the four defendants in the Fleury-Mérogis prison , awaiting trial on hijacking charges.
Revised:  Facing extradition to the United States, the four issued an appeal to the French people on October 11, 1976, claiming that while they were "ready to face the consequences of our act," they could not expect a fair trial in America and "would be condemned to spend the rest of our days in infernal prisons . " French authorities declined the American extradition request in November 1976, holding the four defendants in Fleury-Mérogis prison , awaiting trial on hijacking charges.
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Original:  Facing extradition to the United States, the four issued an appeal to the French people on October 11, 1976, claiming that while they were "ready to face the consequences of our act," they could not expect a fair trial in America and "would be condemned to spend the rest of our days in infernal prisons . "  French authorities declined the American extradition request in November 1976, holding the four defendants in the Fleury-Mérogis prison , awaiting trial on hijacking charges.
Revised:  Facing extradition to the United States, the four issued an appeal to the French people on October 11, 1976, claiming that while they were "ready to face the consequences of our act," they could not expect a fair trial in America and "would be condemned to spend the rest of our days in infernal prisons . " French authorities declined the American extradition request in November 1976, holding the four defendants in the Fleury-Mérogis Prison , awaiting trial on hijacking charges.
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Original:  On November 24, 1978, the Fleury 4 were convicted by a French court for the hijacking.
Revised:  On November 24, 1978, the four were convicted by a French court for the hijacking.
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Original:  Melvin McNair and his wife, Jean, work at an orphanage in the French town of Caen, where reportedly they have turned their lives around completely.
Revised:  Melvin McNair and his wife, Jean, work at an orphanage in Caen, where reportedly they have turned their lives around completely.
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Original:  McNair is known for coaching American baseball, teaching youth the art and strategy of the sport .
Revised:  McNair also coaches youth in baseball .
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Original:  According to Mikhael Ganouna, producer of the film, Wright's hijacking accomplice, George Brown, lives in Paris  but isn't worried about being extradited because he has already served his sentence.
Revised:  According to Mikhael Ganouna, producer of the film, Wright's hijacking accomplice, George Brown, lives in Paris , but isn't worried about being extradited because he has already served his sentence.
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Original:  The elusive fugitive is known to have made his way to France, Guinea-Bissau (a former Portuguese colony) , and finally to Portugal.
Revised:  Wright is known to have made his way to France, Guinea-Bissau (a former Portuguese colony) , and finally to Portugal.
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Original:  The elusive fugitive is known to have made his way to France, Guinea-Bissau (a former Portuguese colony) , and finally to Portugal.
Revised:  The elusive fugitive is known to have made his way to France, Guinea-Bissau , and finally to Portugal.
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Original:  While living in Guinea-Bissau in the 1980s, Wright allegedly used his real name and worked as logistics manager of the Belgium-based nonprofit Iles de Paix.
Revised:  While living in Guinea-Bissau in the 1980s, Wright allegedly used his real name and worked as logistics manager of the Belgian nonprofit Iles de Paix.
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