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Original:  Other right-wing politicians, including Sarah Palin and Newt Gingrich, have opposed the mosque, saying that the World Trade Center site is "hallowed ground "
Revised:  Other right-wing politicians, including Sarah Palin and Newt Gingrich, have opposed the mosque, saying that the World Trade Center site is "hallowed ground .
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Original:  Reaction to the presidential endorsement was mixed.
Revised: However, the next day, he clarified that he was not commenting on the wisdom of the location chosen, just on the basic rights, saying, "I was not commenting and I will not comment on the wisdom of making a decision to put a mosque there. I was commenting very specifically on the right that people have that dates back to our founding." Reaction to the presidential endorsement was mixed.
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Original: World Wrestling Entertainment released a statement on the death Cade threw its website.
Revised: World Wrestling Entertainment released a statement on the death Cade through its website.
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Original: Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and  widow of former President  R. Venkataraman has died at the age of 89.
Revised: Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and the widow of former President R. Venkataraman has died at the age of 89.
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Original: Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and  widow of former President  R. Venkataraman has died at the age of 89.
Revised: Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and widow of former President , R. Venkataraman has died at the age of 89.
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Original: Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and  widow of former President  R. Venkataraman has died at the age of 89.
Revised: Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and widow of former President R. Venkataraman , died at 89.
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Original:  Family members said that Venkataraman was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10th with complaints of a chest infection
Revised:  Her family members said that Venkataraman was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10th with complaints of a chest infection
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Original:  Family members said that Venkataraman was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10th with complaints of a chest infection
Revised:  Family members said that she was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10th with complaints of a chest infection
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Original:  Family members said that Venkataraman was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10th with complaints of a chest infection
Revised:  Family members said that Venkataraman was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10 with complaints of a chest infection
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Original:  Family members said that Venkataraman was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10th with complaints of a chest infection
Revised:  Family members said that Venkataraman was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10th with complaints of chest infection
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Original: Janaki was married to former Indian President R. Venkataraman Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and the widow of former President, Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89.
Revised: Venkataraman was married to former Indian President R. Venkataraman Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and the widow of former President, Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89.
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Original: Janaki was married to former Indian President R. Venkataraman Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and the widow of former President, Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89.
Revised: Janaki was married to former President Venkataraman Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and the widow of former President, Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89.
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Original: Janaki was married to former Indian President R. Venkataraman Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and the widow of former President, Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89.
Revised: Janaki was married to former Indian President R. Venkataraman Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and the widow of former president Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89.
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Original:  Her family members said that she was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10  with complaints of chest infection      
Revised:  Her family members said that she was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram Hospital on August 10 with complaints of chest infection 
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Original:  Her family members said that she was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10  with complaints of chest infection      
Revised:  Her family members said that she was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram hospital on August 10 with complaints of chest infection . 
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Original:  She said , "As a first lady of the country she has performed her role with utmost grace and dignity during the tenure of R  Venkataraman."
Revised:  She said , "As a first lady of the country she has performed her role with utmost grace and dignity during the tenure of R . Venkataraman."
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Original:  She is survived by her three daughters, Padma, Vijaya and Ramachandran Venkataraman.
Revised:  She had three daughters, Padma, Vijaya and Ramachandran Venkataraman.
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Original: Janaki Venkataraman, the former First Lady of India and the widow of former president Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89.
Revised: Janaki Venkataraman, former First Lady of India and the widow of former president Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89.
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Original:  Her family members said that she was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram Hospital in New Dehli on August 10, 2010 with complaints of chest infection .
Revised:  Her family members said that she was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram Hospital in New Dehli on August 10, 2010 with complaints of chest infection 
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Original:  She died around 4:30 p.m. local time (11:00 UTC) .
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Original: Janaki Venkataraman, former First Lady of India and the widow of former president Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89 Saturday, around around 4:30 p.m. local time (11:00 UTC).
Revised: Janaki Venkataraman, former First Lady of India and widow of former president Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89 Saturday, around around 4:30 p.m. local time (11:00 UTC).
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Original:  Her family members said that she was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram Hospital in New Dehli on August 10, 2010 with complaints of chest infection.
Revised:  Her family members said she was admitted to Sir Ganga Ram Hospital in New Dehli on August 10, 2010 with complaints of chest infection.
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Original: Janaki Venkataraman, former First Lady of India and widow of former president Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89 Saturday, around around 4:30 p.m. local time (11:00 UTC).
Revised: Janaki Venkataraman, former first lady of India and widow of former president Ramaswamy Venkataraman, died at 89 Saturday, around around 4:30 p.m. local time (11:00 UTC).
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Original:  Venkataraman was First Lady from 1987 to 1992.
Revised:  Venkataraman was first lady from 1987 to 1992.
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Original:  This is the first fatal attack in Thailand since the start of the holy Islamic festival, Ramadan  
Revised:  This is the first fatal attack in Thailand since the start of the holy Islamic festival, Ramadan . 
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Original:  The second and third victims were a Buddhist couple who were killed on their way to work   
Revised:  The second and third victims were a Buddhist couple who were killed on their way to work . 
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Original: Islamic insurgents shot three people to death in the Yala region of Thailand today .
Revised: Islamic insurgents shot three dead in the Yala region of Thailand today .
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Original:  The insurgents, whose goals are unclear, have killed both Buddhist and Muslims , mainly those who are associated with the state, like police, soldiers, government officials and school teachers
Revised:  The insurgents, whose goals are unclear, have killed both Buddhist and Muslims ; mainly those who are associated with the state, like police, soldiers, government officials and school teachers
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Original:  Islamic insurgents shot three dead in the Yala region of Thailand yesterday .
Revised:  Islamic insurgents have shot three people in the Yala region of Thailand yesterday .
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Original:  The police reported that he later died in the hospital.
Revised:  The police report he died in the hospital.
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Original: The first victim, a police officer, was killed by drive-by shooting as he drove his motorcycle in Pattani.
Revised: The first victim, a police officer, was killed after a drive-by shooting as he drove his motorcycle in Pattani.
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Original:  The second and third victims were a Buddhist couple who were killed on their way to work.
Revised:  The second and third victims were a Buddhist couple , killed on their way to work.
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Original:  Krissada Boonrach, Governor of Yala, asked the provincial security agencies to prepare for increased violence within the country as a result of Ramadan this month.
Revised:  Krissada Boonrach, governor of Yala, asked the provincial security agencies to prepare for increased violence within the country as a result of Ramadan this month.
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Original:  The insurgents, whose goals are unclear, have killed both Buddhist and Muslims ;
Revised:  The insurgents, whose goals are unclear, have killed both Buddhist and Muslims ,
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Original:  mainly those who are associated with the state, like police, soldiers, government officials  and school teachers
Revised:  mainly those who are associated with the state, like police, soldiers, government officials , and school teachers
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Original:  The insurgents, whose goals are unclear, have killed both Buddhist and Muslims, mainly those who are associated with the state, like police, soldiers, government officials, and school teachers
Revised:  The insurgents, goals unclear, have killed both Buddhist and Muslims, mainly those who are associated with the state, like police, soldiers, government officials, and school teachers
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Original:  Ang is accused of receiving some of the confidential data, as well as accepting a portion of the kickbacks paid to Devine    ] 
Revised:  Ang is accused of receiving some of the confidential data, as well as accepting a portion of the kickbacks paid to Devine . ] 
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Original:  Ang is accused of receiving some of the confidential data, as well as accepting a portion of the kickbacks paid to Devine    ] 
Revised:  Ang is accused of receiving some of the confidential data, as well as accepting a portion of the kickbacks paid to Devine it does] 
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Original:  An Apple spokesperson said that the company "is committed to the highest ethical standards in the way [it does] business," and that there is "zero tolerance for dishonest behavior inside or outside the company.  
Revised:  An Apple spokesperson said that the company "is committed to the highest ethical standards in the way [it does] business," and that there is "zero tolerance for dishonest behavior inside or outside the company. " 
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Original: A global supply manager for Apple Inc. was arrested Friday and indicted for wire fraud , money laundering, and accepting over US$1 million in kickbacks.
Revised: A global supply manager for Apple Inc. was arrested Friday and indicted for wire fraud and money laundering, and accepting over US$1 million in kickbacks.
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Original: A global supply manager for Apple Inc. was arrested Friday and indicted for wire fraud , money laundering, and accepting over US$1 million in kickbacks.
Revised: A global supply manager for Apple Inc. was arrested Friday and indicted for wire fraud , money laundering, after accepting over US$1 million in kickbacks.
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Original:  The current death toll does not include the 11 killed in Florida when Katrina struck there last week . Related Story Louisiana locked down;
Revised:  The current death toll does not include the 11 killed in Florida when Katrina struck there last week Related Story Louisiana locked down;
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Original:  The current death toll does not include the 11 killed in Florida when Katrina struck there last week  
Revised:  The current death toll does not include the 11 killed in Florida when Katrina struck there last week . 
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Original:  The current death toll does not include the 11 killed in Florida when Katrina struck there last week  
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Original:  Oil rig platform hits a bridge in Mobile Bay Three more people have been killed by falling trees and at least two died in traffic accidents resulting from the hurricane.
Revised:  Three more people have been killed by falling trees and at least two died in traffic accidents resulting from the hurricane.
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Original: Thirty people died in the Gulf of Mexico resort of Biloxi when Hurricane Katrina demolished an water-side apartment block, Harrison County emergency operations center spokesman Jim Pollard told AP.
Revised: Thirty people died in the Gulf of Mexico resort of Biloxi when Hurricane Katrina demolished a water-side apartment block, Harrison County emergency operations center spokesman Jim Pollard told AP.
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Original:  a number expected to rise.
Revised:  this number is expected to rise.
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Original: The western part of New Orleans has been flooded after  two-block long stretch of the 17th Street Levee gave way on Monday afternoon.
Revised: The western part of New Orleans has been flooded after a two-block long stretch of the 17th Street Levee gave way on Monday afternoon.
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Original: Damage by Katrina Thirty people died in the Gulf of Mexico resort of when demolished a water-side apartment block, Harrison County emergency operations center spokesman Jim Pollard told AP.
Revised:  Thirty people died in the Gulf of Mexico resort of when demolished a water-side apartment block, Harrison County emergency operations center spokesman Jim Pollard told AP.
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Original:  A second powerful earthquake of magnitude 6.3 has struck the island of New Britain in the Pacific Ocean region around Papua New Guinea, just 11 days after a damaging 7.0 quake left the western side of the island without power and communications for almost three days.
Revised:  A second powerful earthquake has struck the island of New Britain in the Pacific Ocean region around Papua New Guinea, just 11 days after a damaging 7.0 quake left the western side of the island without power and communications for almost three days.
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Original:  It   hit at 1.10AM local time, Monday 16 August (15:09 UTC, Sunday 15 August).
Revised:  It It hit at 1.10AM local time, Monday 16 August (15:09 UTC, Sunday 15 August).
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Original:  There are no initial reports at time of press of casualties or damage, and no word at this time from the PTWC of any impending threat of a tsunami
Revised:  There are no reports of casualties or damage, and no word at this time from the PTWC of any impending threat of a tsunami
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Original:  There are no initial reports at time of press of casualties or damage, and no word at this time from the PTWC of any impending threat of a tsunami
Revised:  There are no initial reports at time of press of casualties or damage, and the PTWC have not issued a Tsunami watch or bulletin
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Original:  It hit at 1.10AM local time, Monday 16 August (15:09 UTC, Sunday 15 August).
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Original:  There are no reports of casualties or damage, and the PTWC have not issued a Tsunami watch or bulletin
Revised:  There are no reports of casualties or damage, and no word at this time from the PTWC of any impending threat of a tsunami
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Original:  The water has also released fire ants and thousands of snakes, many being poisonous , from their normal habitats.
Revised:  The water has also released fire ants and thousands of snakes, many being venomous , from their normal habitats.
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Original:  The CNN correspondent said the other side of the roadblock looked like "a scene out of hell" . related stories URL URL URL UR
Revised:  The CNN correspondent said the other side of the roadblock looked like "a scene out of hell" related stories URL URL URL UR
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Original:  The CNN correspondent said the other side of the roadblock looked like "a scene out of hell" . related stories URL URL URL UR
Revised:  The CNN correspondent said the other side of the roadblock looked like "a scene out of hell" . 
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Original: "If you came back, you would be coming literally to a wilderness," van Heeden said.
Revised: "If you came back, you would be coming literally to a wilderness," van Heerden said.
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Original: Ivor van Heerden, Deputy Director of the Louisiana State University Hurricane Center and director of the Center for the Study of Public Health Impacts of Hurricanes, is warning that floodwaters resulting from Hurricane Katrina could carry toxic waste from the "Industrial Canal" area in New Orleans - the site of many chemical plants.
Revised: Ivan van Heerden, Deputy Director of the Louisiana State University Hurricane Center and director of the Center for the Study of Public Health Impacts of Hurricanes, is warning that floodwaters resulting from Hurricane Katrina could carry toxic waste from the "Industrial Canal" area in New Orleans - the site of many chemical plants.
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Original: Ivan van Heerden, Deputy Director of the Louisiana State University Hurricane Center and director of the Center for the Study of Public Health Impacts of Hurricanes, is warning that floodwaters resulting from Hurricane Katrina could carry toxic waste from the "Industrial Canal" area in New Orleans - the site of many chemical plants.
Revised: Ivor van Heerden, Deputy Director of the Louisiana State University Hurricane Center and director of the Center for the Study of Public Health Impacts of Hurricanes, is warning that floodwaters resulting from Hurricane Katrina could carry toxic waste from the "Industrial Canal" area in New Orleans - the site of many chemical plants.
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Original: 150px| File photo of President Lee Myung-bak On Sunday, South Korean President Lee Myung-bak proposed a tax to begin to save for the mammoth cost of reunifying the Korean peninsula, despite the possibility of the tax worsening relations with North Korea  .
Revised: 150px| File photo of President Lee Myung-bak On Sunday, South Korean President Lee Myung-bak proposed a tax to begin to save for the mammoth cost of reunifying the Korean peninsula, despite the possibility of worsening relations with North Korea .
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Original: 150px| File photo of President Lee Myung-bak On Sunday, South Korean President Lee Myung-bak proposed a tax to begin to save for the mammoth cost of reunifying the Korean peninsula, despite the possibility of the tax worsening relations with North Korea  .
Revised: 150px| File photo of President Lee Myung-bak On Sunday, South Korean President Lee Myung-bak proposed a tax to begin to save for the mammoth cost of reunifying the Korean peninsula, despite the possibility of the tax worsening relations with North Korea in the process .
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Original:  Additionally, while opinion polls show that more than 60\% of South Koreans want unification, these polls also show that South Koreans would prefer that reunification would happen later , due to the cost
Revised:  Additionally, while opinion polls show that more than 60\% of South Koreans want unification, these polls also show that South Koreans would prefer that reunification happen later due to the cost
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Original: 150px| File photo of President Lee Myung-bak On Sunday, South Korean President Lee Myung-bak proposed a tax to begin to save for the mammoth cost of reunifying the Korean peninsula, despite the possibility of worsening relations with North Korea in the process.
Revised: 150px| File photo of President Lee Myung-bak On Sunday, South Korean President Lee Myung-bak proposed a tax to begin to save for the cost of reunifying the Korean peninsula, despite the possibility of worsening relations with North Korea in the process.
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Original:  In a speech commemorating the 65th anniversary of the Koreans’ liberation from Japanese rule, Lee stated he “ believe[s] that the time has come to start discussing realistic policies to prepare for that day [of reunification] such as a reunification tax. ” The tax would fund the absorption of the North Korean economy—which is less than 3\% the size of the South Korean economy—and could cost up to $1 trillion, according to New York Times sources.
Revised:  In a speech commemorating the 65th anniversary of the Korean liberation from Japanese rule, Lee stated he “ believe[s] that the time has come to start discussing realistic policies to prepare for that day [of reunification] such as a reunification tax. ” The tax would fund the absorption of the North Korean economy—which is less than 3\% the size of the South Korean economy—and could cost up to $1 trillion, according to New York Times sources.
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Original:  In a speech commemorating the 65th anniversary of the Koreans’ liberation from Japanese rule, Lee stated he “ believe[s] that the time has come to start discussing realistic policies to prepare for that day [of reunification] such as a reunification tax. ” The tax would fund the absorption of the North Korean economy—which is less than 3\% the size of the South Korean economy—and could cost up to $1 trillion, according to New York Times sources.
Revised:  In a speech commemorating the 65th anniversary of the Koreans’ liberation from Japanese rule, Lee stated he " believe[s] that the time has come to start discussing realistic policies to prepare for that day [of reunification] such as a reunification tax. ” The tax would fund the absorption of the North Korean economy—which is less than 3\% the size of the South Korean economy—and could cost up to $1 trillion, according to New York Times sources.
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Original:  In a speech commemorating the 65th anniversary of the Koreans’ liberation from Japanese rule, Lee stated he “ believe[s] that the time has come to start discussing realistic policies to prepare for that day [of reunification] such as a reunification tax. ” The tax would fund the absorption of the North Korean economy—which is less than 3\% the size of the South Korean economy—and could cost up to $1 trillion, according to New York Times sources.
Revised:  In a speech commemorating the 65th anniversary of the Koreans’ liberation from Japanese rule, Lee stated he “ believe[s] that the time has come to start discussing realistic policies to prepare for that day [of reunification] such as a reunification tax. " The tax would fund the absorption of the North Korean economy—which is less than 3\% the size of the South Korean economy—and could cost up to $1 trillion, according to New York Times sources.
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