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Original:  It has been discovered that salt used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable, which in a worse case scenario could lead to it becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
Revised:  It has been discovered that salt used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable, which in a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
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Original:  The latest blow to Toyota's outstanding reputation for safety and quality comes just days after the company announced the suspension from sale of its luxury Lexus GX 460 SUV  
Revised:  The latest blow to Toyota's outstanding reputation for safety and quality comes just days after the company announced the suspension from sale of its luxury Lexus GX 460 SUV . 
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Original:   ]  The latest blow to Toyota's outstanding reputation for safety and quality comes just days after the company announced the suspension from sale of its luxury Lexus GX 460 SUV  .
Revised:  Toyota] The latest blow to Toyota's outstanding reputation for safety and quality comes just days after the company announced the suspension from sale of its luxury Lexus GX 460 SUV .
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Original:  In yet more bad news for Toyota, the Japanese auto maker has issued a voluntary recall of 870,000 of its Sienna minivans in North America , 600,000 in the United States and 270,000 in Canada  The models affected are the first and second generation vehicles manufactured between 1998 and 2010.
Revised:  In yet more bad news for Toyota, the Japanese auto maker has issued a voluntary recall of 870,000 of its Sienna minivans in North America ( 600,000 in the United States and 270,000 in Canada The models affected are the first and second generation vehicles manufactured between 1998 and 2010.
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Original:  In yet more bad news for Toyota, the Japanese auto maker has issued a voluntary recall of 870,000 of its Sienna minivans in North America , 600,000 in the United States and 270,000 in Canada  The models affected are the first and second generation vehicles manufactured between 1998 and 2010.
Revised:  In yet more bad news for Toyota, the Japanese auto maker has issued a voluntary recall of 870,000 of its Sienna minivans in North America , 600,000 in the United States and 270,000 in Canada ). The models affected are the first and second generation vehicles manufactured between 1998 and 2010.
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Original:  It has been discovered that salt used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable, which in a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
Revised:  It has been discovered that salt used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable, this in a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
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Original:  It has been discovered that salt  used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada  could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable , this in a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
Revised:  It has been discovered that salt , used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable , this in a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
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Original:  It has been discovered that salt  used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada  could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable , this in a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
Revised:  It has been discovered that salt used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada , could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable , this in a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
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Original:  It has been discovered that salt  used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada  could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable , this in a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
Revised:  It has been discovered that salt used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable . This corrosion in a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
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Original:  <center>Second generation Sienna In yet more bad news for Toyota, the Japanese auto maker has issued a voluntary recall of 870,000 of its Sienna minivans in North America (600,000 in the United States and 270,000 in Canada).
Revised:  <center>Second generation Sienna Toyota, the Japanese auto maker has issued a voluntary recall of 870,000 of its Sienna minivans in North America (600,000 in the United States and 270,000 in Canada).
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Original:  It has been discovered that salt, used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada, could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tyre carrier cable.
Revised:  It has been discovered that salt, used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada, could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tire carrier cable.
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Original:  Owners of affected vehicles will first be invited to their local dealers to assess any actual damage to the cable, and those needing remedial action will be invited by mail once a fix has been developed.
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Original:  <center>Second generation Sienna Toyota, the Japanese auto maker  has issued a voluntary recall of 870,000 of its Sienna minivans in North America (600,000 in the United States and 270,000 in Canada).
Revised:  <center>Second generation Sienna Toyota, the Japanese auto maker , has issued a voluntary recall of 870,000 of its Sienna minivans in North America (600,000 in the United States and 270,000 in Canada).
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Original:  The models affected are the first and second generation vehicles  manufactured between 1998 and 2010.
Revised:  The models affected are the first and second generation vehicles , which were manufactured between 1998 and 2010.
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Original:  It has been discovered that salt, used to grit roads in snow prone US states and Canada, could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tire carrier cable.
Revised:  It has been discovered that salt, used to grit roads and melt snow in northern US states and Canada, could potentially cause corrosion in the spare tire carrier cable.
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Original:  This corrosion in a worse case scenario  could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
Revised:  In a worse case scenario could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
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Original:  This corrosion in a worse case scenario  could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
Revised:  This corrosion in a worse case scenario , this corrosion could lead to the wheel becoming detached and becoming a hazard for following vehicles.
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Original:  The new 2011 version of the Sienna is not affected  nor are all wheel drive versions of the vehicle.
Revised:  The new 2011 version of the Sienna is not affected , nor are all wheel drive versions of the vehicle.
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Original:  Angelo  Toyota's Chief Quality Officer for North America  that "We [Toyota] are also working diligently to develop a remedy as soon as possible."
Revised:  Angelo , Toyota's Chief Quality Officer for North America that "We [Toyota] are also working diligently to develop a remedy as soon as possible."
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Original:  Angelo  Toyota's Chief Quality Officer for North America  that "We [Toyota] are also working diligently to develop a remedy as soon as possible."
Revised:  Angelo Toyota's Chief Quality Officer for North America , that "We [Toyota] are also working diligently to develop a remedy as soon as possible."
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Original:  The latest blow to Toyota's reputation for safety and quality comes just days after the company announced the suspension from sale of its luxury Lexus GX 460 SUV over fears that it was susceptible to rollovers.
Revised:  The latest blow to Toyota's reputation for safety and quality comes just days after the company announced the suspension of sales of its luxury Lexus GX 460 SUV over fears that it was susceptible to rollovers.
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Original: Angelo , Toyota's Chief Quality Officer for North America,  that " We Toyota are also working diligently to develop a remedy as soon as possible."
Revised: Angelo , Toyota's Chief Quality Officer in North America, that " We Toyota are also working diligently to develop a remedy as soon as possible."
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Original: Angelo , Toyota's Chief Quality Officer for North America,  that " We Toyota are also working diligently to develop a remedy as soon as possible."
Revised: Angelo , Toyota's Chief Quality Officer for North America, that " Toyota are also working diligently to develop a remedy as soon as possible."
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Original: UK ferry operators saw a jump in bookings as stranded air travelers sought other ways to cross the English Channel.
Revised: UK ferry operators saw a jump in bookings as stranded air travellers sought other ways to cross the English Channel.
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Original:  A correspondent for Al Jazeera reporting from London Heathrow airport described stranded travelers ' attitude as being "increasingly frustrated".
Revised:  A correspondent for Al Jazeera reporting from London Heathrow airport described stranded travellers ' attitude as being "increasingly frustrated".
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Original: Chile The Icelandic volcano has not caused many problems in Chile.
Revised:  The Icelandic volcano has not caused many problems in Chile.
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Original:  Local police chief Kjartar Thorkelsson commented: "We had to close roads because of the ash yesterday [Thursday], even though it was not very thick."
Revised:  Local police chief Kjartan Thorkelsson commented: "We had to close roads because of the ash yesterday [Thursday], even though it was not very thick."
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Original: Seventeen insurgents were killed in clashes with security troops in the Orakzai region of the North West-Frontier Province of Pakistan.
Revised: Seventeen insurgents were killed in clashes with security troops in the Orakzai region of the North-West Frontier Province of Pakistan.
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Original:  Nearly 50 people were wounded in the attack . "At least 27 people have died.
Revised:  Nearly 50 people were wounded . "At least 27 people have died.
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Original:  The toll may go up," regional police chief Dilawar Khan Bangash told  Agence France-Presse news agency from the scene of the incident.
Revised:  The toll may go up," regional police chief Dilawar Khan Bangash told the Agence France-Presse news agency from the scene of the incident.
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Original:  The blasts took place at the relief distribution point for internally displaced people , " he commented.
Revised:  The blasts took place at the relief distribution point for internally displaced people . " he commented.
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Original:  The blasts took place at the relief distribution point for internally displaced people , " he commented.
Revised:  The blasts took place at the relief distribution point for internally displaced people , " 
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Original:  Officials later confirmed that the death toll was 30 
Revised:  Officials later confirmed that the death toll was 30. 
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Original:  Teresa Winkler, 76, was one of the mourners who said that she came to pay respect to a President "who took care of the people forgotten by society," such as aging World War II soldiers and forgotten Solidarity activists.
Revised:  Teresa Winkler, 76, was one of the mourners who said that she came to pay respect to a President "who took care of the people forgotten by society," such as aging soldiers and activists.
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Original: A state funeral for the first couple is slated to be held on Sunday , however some world leaders canceled their plans to attend it.
Revised: A state funeral for the first couple is slated to be held on Sunday ; however, some world leaders canceled their plans to attend it.
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Original:  The principal cause for this was that several European airports remained closed  owing to volcanic ash that hovered in different parts of the continent.
Revised:  The principal cause for this was that several European airports remained closed , owing to volcanic ash that hovered in different parts of the continent.
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Original:  Heads of state of Egypt, Macedonia, India, Japan, South Korea, Mexico, New Zealand and Pakistan also canceled  plans to attend the funeral .
Revised:  Heads of state of Egypt, Macedonia, India, Japan, South Korea, Mexico, New Zealand and Pakistan also canceled their plans to attend the funeral .
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Original:  Czech President Vaclav Klaus had stated that he would come to Krakow via train and car, while Slovak President Ivan Gasparovic and Slovenian President Danilo Turk said they would arrive by car.
Revised:  Czech President Vaclav Klaus had stated that he would come to Krakow via train and car, while the presidents of Slovakia and Slovenia said they would arrive by car.
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Original:  South Korean Prime Minister Chung Un-chan too canceled his plans to attend the state funeral while Cardinal Angelo Sodano, dean of the College of Cardinals, was unable to travel from Rome to deliver a memorial Mass on Saturday as several Polish airports remained closed  .
Revised:  South Korean Prime Minister Chung Un-chan also canceled his plans to attend the state funeral while Cardinal Angelo Sodano, dean of the College of Cardinals, was unable to travel from Rome to deliver a memorial Mass on Saturday as several Polish airports remained closed .
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Original:  South Korean Prime Minister Chung Un-chan too canceled his plans to attend the state funeral while Cardinal Angelo Sodano, dean of the College of Cardinals, was unable to travel from Rome to deliver a memorial Mass on Saturday as several Polish airports remained closed  .
Revised:  South Korean Prime Minister Chung Un-chan too canceled his plans to attend the state funeral while Cardinal Angelo Sodano, dean of the College of Cardinals, was unable to travel from Rome to deliver a memorial Mass on Saturday . .
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Original:  Former President Lech Walesa , Prime Minister Donald Tusk and interim president Bronislaw Komorowski were also present.
Revised:  Former President , Prime Minister Donald Tusk and interim president Bronislaw Komorowski were also present.
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Original:  Former President Lech Walesa , Prime Minister Donald Tusk and interim president Bronislaw Komorowski were also present.
Revised:  Former President Lech Walesa , Prime Minister , and interim president Bronislaw Komorowski were also present.
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Original: The RIR is one of the largest regiments in the British Army, and once consisted of eleven battalions, formed by the amalgmation of the Royal Irish Rangers and the Ulster Defence Regiment in 1992.
Revised: The RIR is one of the largest regiments in the British Army, and once consisted of eleven battalions, formed by the amalgamation of the Royal Irish Rangers and the Ulster Defence Regiment in 1992.
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Original:  The move has been wlecome by Nationalists, while Unionists have criticised it 
Revised:  The move has been welcomed by Nationalists, while Unionists have criticised it 
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Original: Unlike much of the British Army, the RIR had been unaffected by the restructuring of the British Armed  that began earlier this year.
Revised: Unlike much of the British Army, the RIR had been unaffected by the restructuring of the British Armed Forces that began earlier this year.
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Original:  The DUP leader, Ian Paisley, has described government plans as "dishonest and dangerous" and that it was a "surrender to  IRA"
Revised:  The DUP leader, Ian Paisley, has described government plans as "dishonest and dangerous" and that it was a "surrender to the IRA"
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Original:  It comes after the Provsional IRA declared that their armed campaign against the British is over.
Revised:  It comes after the Provsional IRA declared that its armed campaign against the British is over.
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Original:  The DUP leader, Ian Paisley, has described government plans as "dishonest and dangerous" and that it was a "surrender to the IRA"  
Revised:  The DUP leader, Ian Paisley, has described government plans as "dishonest and dangerous" and that it was a "surrender to the IRA" . 
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Original:  Two hip-hop bands, "Zaturno" and " Juana Fé " , performed in the centre of Peralillo on Friday morning
Revised:  Two hip-hop bands, Zaturno, and Juana Fé " , performed in the centre of Peralillo on Friday morning
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Original:  Two hip-hop bands, "Zaturno" and " Juana Fé " , performed in the centre of Peralillo on Friday morning
Revised:  Two hip-hop bands, "Zaturno" and " Juana Fé , performed in the centre of Peralillo on Friday morning
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Original:  A North Korean military officer was quoted by the state-run news agency KCNA as saying that "The puppet military warmongers, right-wing conservative politicians and the group of other traitors in South Korea are now foolishly seeking to link the accident with the north at any cost."
Revised:  A North Korean military officer was quoted by the state-run news agency KCNA as saying that "The puppet military warmongers, right-wing conservative politicians and the group of other traitors in South Korea are now foolishly seeking to link the accident with the North at any cost."
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Original:  Before the incident, Soth Korean President Lee Myung-bak had been reportedly trying to arrange a meeting between officials from the two Korea's, and if signs of North Korean involvement become evident, it could undermine Lee's credibility in South Korea, as we would likely be seen as having left holes in South Korea's defense
Revised:  Before the incident, South Korean President Lee Myung-bak had been reportedly trying to arrange a meeting between officials from the two Korea's, and if signs of North Korean involvement become evident, it could undermine Lee's credibility in South Korea, as we would likely be seen as having left holes in South Korea's defense
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Original: 250px|Tijuana, Mexico - San Diego, United States border, Tijuana is of the right At 8:50 AM local time,  attempting to enter the United States, tried to escape U.S. Custom officers at the US - Mexican border, after he could not provide official documentation.
Revised: 250px|Tijuana, Mexico - San Diego, United States border, Tijuana is of the right At 8:50 AM local time, a man attempting to enter the United States, tried to escape U.S. Custom officers at the US - Mexican border, after he could not provide official documentation.
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Original:  The driver then accelerated his car, crashing into a pickup truck  most likely trying to force it out of the way.
Revised:  The acceleration caused him to crash into a pickup truck most likely trying to force it out of the way.
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Original:  The driver then accelerated his car, crashing into a pickup truck  most likely trying to force it out of the way.
Revised:  The driver then accelerated his car, crashing into a pickup truck , most likely trying to force it out of the way.
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Original:  When Custom Officers surrounded the vehicle, the driver went into reverse, which led to two officers , opening fire on the vehicle.
Revised:  When Custom Officers surrounded the vehicle, the driver went into reverse, which led to two officers opening fire on the vehicle.
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Original: 250px|Tijuana, Mexico - San Diego, United States border, Tijuana is of the right At 8:50 AM local time  , a man attempting to enter the United States  , tried to escape U.S. Custom officers at the US - Mexican border , after he could not provide official documentation.
Revised: 250px|Tijuana, Mexico - San Diego, United States border, Tijuana is of the right At 8:50 AM local time , a man attempting to enter the United States , tried to escape U.S. Custom officers , after he could not provide official documentation.
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Original:  250px| Tijuana, Mexico - San Diego, United States border, Tijuanais of the right At 8:50 AM local time (3:50 PM UTC) , a man attempting to enter the United States at the Tijuana - San Diego section of the US - Mexican border, tried to escape U.S. Custom officers , after he could not provide official documentation.
Revised:  250px| San Diego, United States border, Tijuanais of the right At 8:50 AM local time (3:50 PM UTC) , a man attempting to enter the United States at the Tijuana - San Diego section of the US - Mexican border, tried to escape U.S. Custom officers , after he could not provide official documentation.
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Original: ]] At 8:50 AM local time ( 3 :50 PM UTC) , a man attempting to enter the United States at the Tijuana - San Diego section of the US - Mexican border, tried to escape U.S. Custom officers, after he could not provide official documentation.
Revised: ]] At 8:50 AM local time ( 3 :50 UTC) a man attempting to enter the United States at the Tijuana - San Diego section of the US - Mexican border, tried to escape U.S. Custom officers, after he could not provide official documentation.
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Original: ]] At 8:50 AM local time ( 3 :50 PM UTC) , a man attempting to enter the United States at the Tijuana - San Diego section of the US - Mexican border, tried to escape U.S. Custom officers, after he could not provide official documentation.
Revised: ]] At 8:50 AM local time ( 3 :50 PM UTC) , a man attempting to enter the United States at the Tijuana - San Diego section of the US - Mexican border, tried to escape U.S. customs officers, after he could not provide official documentation.
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Original:  The acceleration caused him to crash into a pickup truck, most likely trying to force it out of the way.
Revised:  The acceleration caused him to crash into a pickup truck, it is thought he was trying to force it out of the way.
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Original:  The acceleration caused him to crash into a pickup truck, most likely trying to force it out of the way.
Revised:  The acceleration caused him to crash into a pickup truck, most likely trying to force the other vehicle out of the way.
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Original:  When Custom Officers surrounded the vehicle, the driver went into reverse, which led to two officers opening fire on the vehicle.
Revised:  When customs officers surrounded the vehicle, the driver went into reverse, which led to two officers opening fire on the vehicle.
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Original:  The man was only shot once and the wound was deemed non life threatening.
Revised:  The man was only shot once and the wound was not life threatening.
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Original: The acceleration caused him to crash into a pickup truck , it is thought he was trying to force the other vehicle out of the way.
Revised: The acceleration caused him to crash into a pickup truck . It is thought he was trying to force the other vehicle out of the way.
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