wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The German Ministry of Defence reports that 1.500 naval personell, 100 airlift soldiers, 400 mission control staff, 100 soldiers for training and advice to the Lebanese security forces and 300 personell as tactical reserve have been sent to the Lebanese coast .1 (German) Despite official statements by Beirut, there appears to be a large faction in the government who believe that Germany taking command of the force will lead to a biased execution of the UN mandate in favor of Israel . 2(Germa
Revised:  The German Ministry of Defence reports that 1.500 naval personell, 100 airlift soldiers, 400 mission control staff, 100 soldiers for training and advice to the Lebanese security forces and 300 personell as tactical reserve have been sent to the Lebanese coast . Despite official statements by Beirut, there appears to be a large faction in the government who believe that Germany taking command of the force will lead to a biased execution of the UN mandate in favor of Israel . 2(Germa
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Original:  The German Ministry of Defence reports that 1.500 naval personell, 100 airlift soldiers, 400 mission control staff, 100 soldiers for training and advice to the Lebanese security forces and 300 personell as tactical reserve have been sent to the Lebanese coast .1 (German) Despite official statements by Beirut, there appears to be a large faction in the government who believe that Germany taking command of the force will lead to a biased execution of the UN mandate in favor of Israel . 2(Germa
Revised:  The German Ministry of Defence reports that 1.500 naval personell, 100 airlift soldiers, 400 mission control staff, 100 soldiers for training and advice to the Lebanese security forces and 300 personell as tactical reserve have been sent to the Lebanese coast .1 (German) Despite official statements by Beirut, there appears to be a large faction in the government who believe that Germany taking command of the force will lead to a biased execution of the UN mandate in favor of Israel 
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Original:  Germany has contributed 2.400 personell for this mission.
Revised:  Germany has contributed 2.400 personnel for this mission.
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Original: The number of businessmen from the United Kingdom who intend to invest in Romania has double this year in comparison to 2004, showing that the country is becoming an increasingly attractive destination for British investors.
Revised: The number of businessmen from the United Kingdom who intend to invest in Romania has doubled this year in comparison to 2004, showing that the country is becoming an increasingly attractive destination for British investors.
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Original:  By contrast, the Australian defenders held Canada's to just seven goals  .
Revised:  By contrast, the Australian defenders held Canada's to just seven goals . At one point two Australian defenders trapped him in a corner, unable to move, which he found very frustrating .
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Original: London, England — The defeated Canada 66-51 to win Australia's last gold medal of the 2012 Summer Paralympics .
Revised: London, England — The defeated Canada 66-51 to win Australia's last gold medal of the .
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Original:  Ryley out-paced, out-maneuvred and out-scored all comers.
Revised:  Ryley out-paced, out-maneuvered, and out-scored all comers.
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Original:  At one point two Australian defenders trapped him in a corner, unable to move, which he found very frustrating.
Revised:  At one point two Australian defenders trapped him in a corner, unable to move, which he appeared to find very frustrating.
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Original:  He still shares the ball with the rest of the team though .
Revised:  He did share the ball with the rest of the team though .
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Original:  He still shares the ball with the rest of the team though .
Revised:  He still shares the ball with the rest of the team .
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Original:  Ryley out-paced, out-maneuvered, and out-scored all comers . Before the game he skylarked by riding his wheelchair on one wheel.
Revised:  Ryley out-paced, out-maneuvered, and out-scored his opponents . Before the game he skylarked by riding his wheelchair on one wheel.
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Original:  The commentator called him "" in recognition of how he could escape any attempt to restrain him.
Revised:  The commentator called him "" for escaping any attempt to restrain him.
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Original:  Auditor-General, Kevin Brady ruled that $1.17 million of taxpayers' money had been spent unlawfully on electioneering by political parties .
Revised:  Auditor-General, Kevin Brady ruled that $1.17 million of taxpayers' money had been spent unlawfully on electioneering .
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Original: There have been a numerous amount of questions on the Libertarianz auction, mostly humourous , including: "Do I earn FlyBuys when I use the card?" with the response: "No. Labour doesn't need to earn your loyalty.
Revised: There have been a numerous amount of questions on the Libertarianz auction, mostly humorous , including: "Do I earn FlyBuys when I use the card?" with the response: "No. Labour doesn't need to earn your loyalty.
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Original: The TADA court in Mumbai held four accused guilty of assisting Tiger Memon in smuggling arms and RDX that were used in the serial blasts.
Revised: The TADA court inMumbai held four accused guilty of assisting Tiger Memon in smuggling arms and RDX that were used in the serial blasts.
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Original: Tulsiram Dhondu Surve, watchman of high security Wangani mircowave tower in Raigad district, was found guilty of allowing Tiger's men to use government property for the purpose of loading arms into vehicles which then transported them to Mumbai.
Revised: Tulsiram Dhondu Surve, watchman of high security Wangani microwave tower in Raigad district, was found guilty of allowing Tiger's men to use government property for the purpose of loading arms into vehicles which then transported them to Mumbai.
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Original:  Four others were acquited for want of evidence.
Revised:  Four others were acquitted for want of evidence.
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Original:  A: See my platform, specially Some of my specific action 
Revised:  A: See my platform, specially Some of my specific actions. 
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Original:  I have specific plans to make it happen and I have the energy to pursue the 
Revised:  I have specific plans to make it happen and I have the energy to pursue them. 
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Original:  John Blair 48-year-old John Blair is a high school English teacher.
Revised: 7 John Blair 48-year-old John Blair is a high school English teacher.
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Original:  We should strive to earn the respect of those who have elected u 
Revised:  We should strive to earn the respect of those who have elected us. 
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Original: 7 John Blair 48-year-old John Blair is a high school English teacher.
Revised:  John Blair 48-year-old John Blair is a high school English teacher.
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Original:  We should strive to earn the respect of those who have elected us           .
Revised:  We should strive to earn the respect of those who have elected us . .
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Original:  We should strive to earn the respect of those who have elected us           .
Revised:  We should strive to earn the respect of those who have elected us Q: Why have you chosen to involve yourself in the political process? A: I have always had an interest in the democratic process and now, the timing is good. I am in the prime of life and so is Toronto: it's a good mix. .
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Original:  I am  in the prime of life and so is Toronto: it's a good mix .
Revised:  I am in the prime of life , energetic and dedicated to civic duty. I want to use my experience, knowledge, and intelligence to serve the people of Ward 25 and to engage them more fully in decisions that affect them in their community. I also want to influence and inspire the direction of the growth of this wonderful city in a positive way .
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Original:  A: Managing the City's phenomenal Growth with a focus on those areas that impact on Ward 25.
Revised:  A: Managing the City's phenomenal growth with a focus on those areas that impact on Ward 25.
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Original:  Urban Development pressure and its impact on the neighbourhood, infrastructure, and environment.
Revised:  • Urban development pressure and its impact on the neighbourhood, infrastructure, and environment.
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Original:   Accountability, transparency and responsible fiscal management at City Hall with a focus on increasing efficiency and reducing spending to alleviate upward pressures on property taxes.
Revised:  • Accountability, transparency and responsible fiscal management at City Hall with a focus on increasing efficiency and reducing spending to alleviate upward pressures on property taxes.
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Original:   Greater interaction between councillor and community with a view to engaging the community in decisions that effect the community and ensuring top quality customer service.
Revised:  • Greater interaction between councillor and community with a view to engaging the community in decisions that effect the community and ensuring top quality customer service.
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Original:  I want to know their concerns, first hand , and make every effort to provide the means by which they can communicate their concerns and also hear their suggestions for solutions.
Revised:  I want to know their concerns, firsthand , and make every effort to provide the means by which they can communicate their concerns and also hear their suggestions for solutions.
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Original:  A: Managing Toronto ’ s density explosion: The population of Toronto is increasing at about 15,000 people per year.
Revised:  A: Managing Toronto ' s density explosion: The population of Toronto is increasing at about 15,000 people per year.
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Original:  As a result, we ’ ve had about a $240,000,000 capital shortfall every year – which we’ve “solved” by increasing debt and seeking handouts from other orders of government.
Revised:  As a result, we ' ve had about a $240,000,000 capital shortfall every year – which we’ve “solved” by increasing debt and seeking handouts from other orders of government.
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Original:  What the City should be most proud of is Council ’ s decision to recommend that corporations and unions no longer be permitted to make contributions to candidates for election to City Council.
Revised:  What the City should be most proud of is Council ' s decision to recommend that corporations and unions no longer be permitted to make contributions to candidates for election to City Council.
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Original:  I would also, continually thank people for trying to make this city better, most in small ways, but as a group what a difference  
Revised:  I would also, continually thank people for trying to make this city better, most in small ways, but as a group what a difference !! 
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Original:  I also have a degree of awareness of the poltical processes at City Hall and many of the politicians too, though part of me wants most of them tosse 
Revised:  I also have a degree of awareness of the poltical processes at City Hall and many of the politicians too, though part of me wants most of them tossed. 
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Original: Hamish Wilson 49-year-old Hamish Wilson is a writer, consultant, and does house repair  . Q: Describe the three most important issues in your campaign.
Revised: Hamish Wilson 49-year-old Hamish Wilson is a writer, consultant, does house repair . Q: Describe the three most important issues in your campaign.
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Original:  Transport sector emissions lead our emissions growth yet the slim majority of NDP councillors are persisting with the Front St.
Revised:  Transport sector emissions lead our emissions growth yet the slim majority of NDP councilors are persisting with the Front St.
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Original:  Extension project, which hasn't looked at transit options, nor harm to transit from this $ 255million 2km roadway.
Revised:  Extension project, which hasn't looked at transit options, nor harm to transit from this $ 255 million 2 km roadway.
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Original:  A: We are all climate cariminals to some degree, and to spend over a quarter billion on a road folly while lots of other things fall apart is wrong.
Revised:  A: We are all climate criminals to some degree, and to spend over a quarter billion on a road folly while lots of other things fall apart is wrong.
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Original:  Extension which is big tax money, I'm on the Toronto Cycling Committee (again - I took off a couple of years, but it's been nearly a decade of bikework , and I'm quite involved in the TaketheTooker.ca effort.
Revised:  Extension which is big tax money, I'm on the Toronto Cycling Committee (again - I took off a couple of years, but it's been nearly a decade of bike work , and I'm quite involved in the TaketheTooker.ca effort.
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Original:  Q: If you were elected as a "rookie" councillor , What would you bring to the table beyond the incumbent?
Revised:  Q: If you were elected as a "rookie" councilor , What would you bring to the table beyond the incumbent?
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Original:  I'd also be more wlling to be harder on automobility but we also have to promote options - I have some ideas and am propositional, not reactionary.
Revised:  I'd also be more willing to be harder on automobility but we also have to promote options - I have some ideas and am propositional, not reactionary.
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Original:  I also have a degree of awareness of the poltical processes at City Hall and many of the politicians too, though part of me wants most of them tossed.
Revised:  I also have a degree of awareness of the political processes at City Hall and many of the politicians too, though part of me wants most of them tossed.
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Original:  The 22-year-old claimed that he crashed the car after attempting to operate the car's Satelite navigation system.
Revised:  The 22-year-old claimed that he crashed the car after attempting to operate the car's Satellite navigation system.
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Original: An analysis of melatonin studies has upheld the controversial supplement's effectiveness as a sleep aid.
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Original:  The analysis, which included 17 peer-reviewed scientific papers, was aimed at determining whether supplements of the hormone can improve sleep among insomniacs, older adults and others.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% At that dose, says Wurtman, the hormone's effects end after a few days because melatonin receptors in the brain become unresponsive when exposed to too much of the hormone.
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Original:  Such inadvertent overdosing, say the researchers, has contributed to controversy over melatonin's efficacy.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% But the new meta-analysis shows that melatonin does indeed have positive effects on sleep—even though some of the analyzed studies also involved high doses of the hormone.
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Original: "We recognize that the European Commission dose not give 'green lights' for new products, and we have not asked for one.
Revised: "We recognize that the European Commission does not give 'green lights' for new products, and we have not asked for one.
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Original: The entire debate started when Microsoft were responding to a letter recieved by the european competiton commisioner , Neelie Kroes, that showed concerns over "The possible bundling into Vista of certain products, such as internet search and certain security features that are currently available on a standalone basis from Microsoft and other vendors".
Revised: The entire debate started when Microsoft were responding to a letter recieved by the European Competiton Commissioner , Neelie Kroes, that showed concerns over "The possible bundling into Vista of certain products, such as internet search and certain security features that are currently available on a standalone basis from Microsoft and other vendors".
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Original: The news should be welcomed by all those anticipating Windows Vista within the European community, with Microsoft showing complience to follow the regulations set out by the European Commission.
Revised: The news should be welcomed by all those anticipating Windows Vista within the European community, with Microsoft showing compliance to follow the regulations set out by the European Commission.
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Original:  The entire debate started when Microsoft were responding to a letter recieved by the European Competiton Commissioner, Neelie Kroes, that showed concerns over "The possible bundling into Vista of certain products, such as internet search and certain security features that are currently available on a standalone basis from Microsoft and other vendors".
Revised:  The entire debate started when Microsoft were responding to a letter received by the European Competiton Commissioner, Neelie Kroes, that showed concerns over "The possible bundling into Vista of certain products, such as internet search and certain security features that are currently available on a standalone basis from Microsoft and other vendors".
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Original:  The entire debate started when Microsoft were responding to a letter recieved by the European Competiton Commissioner, Neelie Kroes, that showed concerns over "The possible bundling into Vista of certain products, such as internet search and certain security features that are currently available on a standalone basis from Microsoft and other vendors".
Revised:  The entire debate started when Microsoft were responding to a letter recieved by the European Competition Commissioner, Neelie Kroes, that showed concerns over "The possible bundling into Vista of certain products, such as internet search and certain security features that are currently available on a standalone basis from Microsoft and other vendors".
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Original:  In July, Smith had made a statement that Microsoft had offered to create changes to its system to comply with the commission, and that it had asked the commision to state which changes would make Vista apply to its standards and regulations.
Revised:  In July, Smith had made a statement that Microsoft had offered to create changes to its system to comply with the commission, and that it had asked the commission to state which changes would make Vista apply to its standards and regulations.
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Original:  Only time will tell whether Microsoft decides to fight the commissions regulations or if it will comply and change its syste 
Revised:  Only time will tell whether Microsoft decides to fight the commissions regulations or if it will comply and change its system. 
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Original:  Researchers from the UK Institute of Child Health have shown that a chemical in the tea reduces cell death following such incidents, which in turn could fight tissue death and organ failure.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Led by Anastasis Stephanou, the researchers showed in heart cells that the chemical epigallocatechin-3-gallate (EGCG) inhibits cell death, apparently by blocking the action of a protein called Star 1.
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Original:  This protein is activated in cells after a stressful event and contributes to inducing cell death.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% EGCG also appears to speed recovery of heart cells to spur tissue recovery.
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Original:  Stephanou says that while the researchers are "extremely encouraged" by the findings, more research is necessary before people are advised to drink green tea after heart attack or stroke.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The research is reported in The FASEB Journal.
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Original:  Category:Health Category:Published%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% pt:Componente do chá verde protege células do coração sv:Grönt te skyddar hjärtcell
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Original: Green tea may protect against damage from heart attack and stroke .
Revised:  may protect against damage from heart attack and stroke .
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Original: Green tea may protect against damage from heart attack and stroke .
Revised: Green tea may protect against damage from and .
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Original:  Researchers from the UK Institute of Child Health have shown that a chemical in the tea reduces cell death following such incidents, which in turn could fight tissue death and organ failure.
Revised:  Researchers from the UK have shown that a chemical in the tea reduces cell death following such incidents, which in turn could fight tissue death and organ failure.
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Original:  Cullen last week said, when he was announced the surplus;
Revised:  Cullen last week said, when he announced the surplus;
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Original:  Makati City Mayor  Jejomar Binay, Vice Mayor Ernesto Mercado and sixteen (16) members of the  city council were served a sixty day (60) suspension order from performing their official tasks.
Revised: w: Makati City Mayor Jejomar Binay, Vice Mayor Ernesto Mercado and sixteen (16) members of the city council were served a sixty day (60) suspension order from performing their official tasks.
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Original:  Makati City Mayor  Jejomar Binay, Vice Mayor Ernesto Mercado and sixteen (16) members of the  city council were served a sixty day (60) suspension order from performing their official tasks.
Revised:  Makati City Mayor Jejomar Binay, Vice Mayor Ernesto Mercado and sixteen (16) members of the w: city council were served a sixty day (60) suspension order from performing their official tasks.
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Original:  The suspension order was issued by Executive Secretary Eduardo Ermita and was served to Binay and the Makati officials by Labor and Employment Undersecretary Wencelito Andar on the morning of Tuesday,  October 17,  2006.
Revised:  The suspension order was issued by w:Executive Secretary w: Eduardo Ermita and was served to Binay and the Makati officials by Labor and Employment Undersecretary Wencelito Andar on the morning of Tuesday, October 17, 2006.
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Original:  Andanar was escorted by alsmot 700 members of the  Philippine National Police who secured the perimeter access into the Makati City Hall.
Revised:  Andanar was escorted by alsmot 700 members of the w: Philippine National Police who secured the perimeter access into the Makati City Hall.
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Original:  Binay and his symphatizers started to hold their fort around the  city hall on Monday night to prevent representatives from the Office of the President to serve the suspension order.
Revised:  Binay and his symphatizers started to hold their fort around the w: city hall on Monday night to prevent representatives from the Office of the President to serve the suspension order.
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Original:  The local executives of Makati City were being suspended as preventive measures against possible tampering of evidence as the  Philippines Ombudsman conducts an investigation on the alleged payment of wages to ghost employees.
Revised:  The local executives of Makati City were being suspended as preventive measures against possible tampering of evidence as the w: Philippines Ombudsman conducts an investigation on the alleged payment of wages to ghost employees.
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