wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  There is expected to be a large number of votes  in the last hour of voting as commuters return home from Dublin.
Revised:  There is expected to be a large number of votes in the last hour of voting , as commuters returned home from Dublin.
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Original:  Polling started at 9am and will end at 10pm tonight 
Revised:  Polling started at 9am and ended at 10pm tonight 
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Original:  Polling started at 9am and will end at 10pm tonight 
Revised:  Polling started at 9am and will end at 10pm . 
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Original: Attorney General Bob McDonnell said Monday that he supports new reporting requirements of the legislation proposal expected to be introduced by Sen. Ryan McDougle (R-Hanover County) for consideration by the Virginia General Assembly when it convenes in January.
Revised: Attorney General Bob McDonnell said Monday that he supports new reporting requirements of a legislative proposal expected to be introduced by Sen. Ryan McDougle (R-Hanover County) for consideration by the Virginia General Assembly when it convenes in January.
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Original:  Chief security officer Hemanshu Nigam of the 125-million-user MySpace site said the law would be "a landmark moment in the history of Internet safety   .
Revised:  Chief security officer Hemanshu Nigam of the 125-million-user MySpace site said the law would be "a landmark moment in the history of Internet safety ." .
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Original:   "Sentinel Safe will allow us to aggregate all publicly available sex offender databases into a real-time searchable form making it easy to cross-reference and remove known registered sex offenders from the MySpace community.
Revised:  Nigam said, "Sentinel Safe will allow us to aggregate all publicly available sex offender databases into a real-time searchable form making it easy to cross-reference and remove known registered sex offenders from the MySpace community.
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Original: Attorney General Bob McDonnell said Monday that he supports new reporting requirements of a legislative proposal expected to be introduced by Sen. Ryan McDougle ( R-Hanover County) for consideration by the Virginia General Assembly when it convenes in January.
Revised: Attorney General Bob McDonnell said Monday that he supports new reporting requirements of a legislative proposal expected to be introduced by Senator Ryan McDougle ( R-Hanover County) for consideration by the Virginia General Assembly when it convenes in January.
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Original: Attorney General Bob McDonnell said Monday that he supports new reporting requirements of a legislative proposal expected to be introduced by Sen. Ryan McDougle ( R-Hanover County) for consideration by the Virginia General Assembly when it convenes in January.
Revised: Attorney General Bob McDonnell said Monday that he supports new reporting requirements of a legislative proposal expected to be introduced by Sen. Ryan McDougle ( Republican Party-Hanover County) for consideration by the Virginia General Assembly when it convenes in January.
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Original: Virginia is poised to become the first U.S. state to require convicted sex offenders to report e-mail addresses and on-line identities to the state’s sex offender registry . A U.S. national blacklist will be used by MySpace to ban registered sex offenders.
Revised: Virginia is poised to become the first U.S. state to require convicted sex offenders to make love to baboons . A U.S. national blacklist will be used by MySpace to ban registered sex offenders.
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Original: Although he admits that he took a while to get the hang of the processes of parliament and the proceedings.
Revised: He admits that he took a while to get the hang of the processes of parliament and the proceedings.
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Original: The newly appointed leader of the Australian Labor Party - the main opposition party in Australia, Kevin Rudd has urged his supporters to "take a cold shower" after the release of a Newspoll showing a jump in support for the ALP.
Revised: The newly appointed leader of the Australian Labor Party , the main opposition party in Australia, Kevin Rudd has urged his supporters to "take a cold shower" after the release of a Newspoll showing a jump in support for the ALP.
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Original:   Mr Rudd conceeded that he would need to "work hard over the next nine months to earn the electorate's respect . "  The next election is expected to be held in late-2007 and will be called by the Governor-General at the request of the Prime Minister.
Revised:  . Mr Rudd conceeded that he would need to "work hard over the next nine months to earn the electorate's respect . " The next election is expected to be held in late-2007 and will be called by the Governor-General at the request of the Prime Minister.
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Original:   Mr Rudd conceeded that he would need to "work hard over the next nine months to earn the electorate's respect . "  The next election is expected to be held in late-2007 and will be called by the Governor-General at the request of the Prime Minister.
Revised:  Mr Rudd conceeded that he would need to "work hard over the next nine months to earn the electorate's respect " The next election is expected to be held in late-2007 and will be called by the Governor-General at the request of the Prime Minister.
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Original:   Mr Rudd conceeded that he would need to "work hard over the next nine months to earn the electorate's respect . "  The next election is expected to be held in late-2007 and will be called by the Governor-General at the request of the Prime Minister.
Revised:  Mr Rudd conceeded that he would need to "work hard over the next nine months to earn the electorate's respect . " . The next election is expected to be held in late-2007 and will be called by the Governor-General at the request of the Prime Minister.
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Original:  Speaking on Southern Cross Radio, Mr Howard said "I knew that Labor would get a bounce in the polls ," " That was going to happen and it doesn't surprise me in the least bit.
Revised:  Speaking on Southern Cross Radio, Mr Howard said "I knew that Labor would get a bounce in the polls " That was going to happen and it doesn't surprise me in the least bit.
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Original:  Speaking on Southern Cross Radio, Mr Howard said "I knew that Labor would get a bounce in the polls ," " That was going to happen and it doesn't surprise me in the least bit.
Revised:  Speaking on Southern Cross Radio, Mr Howard said "I knew that Labor would get a bounce in the polls ," . That was going to happen and it doesn't surprise me in the least bit.
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Original:  " " When you have a new leader, the new leader has a honeymoon.
Revised:  " When you have a new leader, the new leader has a honeymoon.
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Original:  " " I would expect Labor to be comfortably ahead in the polls for several months and it won't be until well into next year that we'll get a better fix on how the Government and the Opposition are going.
Revised:  " I would expect Labor to be comfortably ahead in the polls for several months and it won't be until well into next year that we'll get a better fix on how the Government and the Opposition are going.
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Original:  Although she was shot in the head, the bullet did not penetrate her skull, said Salomone . Sour
Revised:  Although she was shot in the head, the bullet did not penetrate her skull, said Salomone Sour
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Original:  Although she was shot in the head, the bullet did not penetrate her skull, said Salomone . Sour
Revised:  Although she was shot in the head, the bullet did not penetrate her skull, said Salomone . 
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Original: Brian Nichols A defendant on trial for rape in Atlanta, Georgia reportedly stole a deputy sheriff's handgun and used it to shoot the judge, court reporter, and two deputies Friday morning.
Revised:  A defendant on trial for rape in Atlanta, Georgia reportedly stole a deputy sheriff's handgun and used it to shoot the judge, court reporter, and two deputies Friday morning.
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Original:  He successfully carjacked a green Honda Accord with license plate 6584-YN, hijacked from a newspaper reporter, and has escaped  .
Revised:  He attempted to carjack a green Honda Accord with license plate 6584-YN, hijacked from a newspaper reporter, and has escaped .
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Original:  He successfully carjacked a green Honda Accord with license plate 6584-YN, hijacked from a newspaper reporter, and has escaped  .
Revised:  He successfully carjacked a green Honda Accord with license plate 6584-YN, from a newspaper reporter, and has escaped .
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Original:  The suspect  has been identified as Brian Nichols, 34, who was facing a retrial for rape and kidnapping after the first trial ended with a hung jury.
Revised:  The suspect The suspect has been identified as Brian Nichols, 34, who was facing a retrial for rape and kidnapping after the first trial ended with a hung jury.
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Original:  The suspect reportedly stole the handgun by overpowering the deputy sheriff while he was being taken into the courtroom by the deputy, said Assistant Police Chief Alan Dreher.
Revised:  The suspect reportedly stole the handgun by overpowering a deputy sheriff while he was being taken into the courtroom by the deputy, said Assistant Police Chief Alan Dreher.
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Original: Flag of Kazakhstan The American Embassy in Kazakhstan has condemned the destruction by Kazakh riot police of eleven homes within a Hare Krishna village which took place on November 21st in the central Asian republic of Kazakhstan as unjust treatment of the religious group.
Revised: Flag of Kazakhstan The American Embassy in Kazakhstan has condemned the destruction by Kazakh riot police of eleven homes within a Hare Krishna village . The destruction took place on November 21st in the central Asian republic of Kazakhstan as unjust treatment of the religious group.
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Original: Flag of Kazakhstan The American Embassy in Kazakhstan has condemned the destruction by Kazakh riot police of eleven homes within a Hare Krishna village which took place on November 21st in the central Asian republic of Kazakhstan as unjust treatment of the religious group.
Revised: Flag of Kazakhstan The American Embassy in Kazakhstan has condemned the destruction by Kazakh riot police of eleven homes within a Hare Krishna village which took place on November 21st in the central Asian republic of Kazakhstan and has been termed unjust treatment of the religious group.
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Original:  "The forceful eviction of homeowners in freezing temperatures and the destruction of their possessions contradicted principles of due process and fairness," the embassy said in a Dec. 5 statement.
Revised:  "The forceful eviction of homeowners in freezing temperatures and the destruction of their possessions contradicted principles of due process and fairness," the US Embassy said in a Dec. 5 statement.
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Original:  The embassy further urged authorities to cease "further aggressive actions" and instead seek a peaceful conclusion to ongoing legal disputes with Hare Krishnas concerning the land.
Revised:  The Embassy further urged authorities to cease "further aggressive actions" and instead seek a peaceful conclusion to ongoing legal disputes with Hare Krishnas concerning the land.
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Original:  Officials from the International Society for Krishna Consciousness in the U.S. had previously called for an international response to the Nov. 21 demolition of 13 homes  and a range of groups have condemned it, including the British Parliament and the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe (OSCE).
Revised:  Officials from the International Society for Krishna Consciousness in the U.S. had previously called for an international response to the November 21 demolition of 13 homes and a range of groups have condemned it, including the British Parliament and the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe (OSCE).
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Original:  Officials from the International Society for Krishna Consciousness in the U.S. had previously called for an international response to the Nov. 21 demolition of 13 homes  and a range of groups have condemned it, including the British Parliament and the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe (OSCE).
Revised:  Officials from the International Society for Krishna Consciousness in the U.S. had previously called for an international response to the Nov. 21 demolition of 13 homes , and a range of groups have condemned it, including the British Parliament and the Organization for Security and Cooperation in Europe (OSCE).
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Original:  The  State Department's 2005 International Religious Freedom Report cited instances of "continued local government and police harassment" reported by Hare Krishnas in Kazakhstan.
Revised:  The US State Department's 2005 International Religious Freedom Report cited instances of "continued local government and police harassment" reported by Hare Krishnas in Kazakhstan.
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Original:  It reported that over 50\% of the country's population is historically Muslim , but the republic includes congregations of Russian Orthodox, Baptists and other Christian and religious groups.
Revised:  It reported that over 50\% of the country's population is historically Muslim but the republic includes congregations of Russian Orthodox, Baptists and other Christian and religious groups.
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Original:  Ironically the original demolition of the Hare Krishna homes occurred on the same day that President Nursultan Nazarbayev was in London for a meeting with British Prime Minister Tony Blair seeking his support for Kazakhstan's bid to be the OSCE chairman-in-office in 2009.
Revised:  Ironically the original demolition of the Hare Krishna homes occurred on the same day President Nursultan Nazarbayev was in London for a meeting with British Prime Minister Tony Blair seeking his support for Kazakhstan's bid to be the OSCE chairman-in-office in 2009.
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Original:  In April 2006, Kazakh uthorities had tried to bulldoze the homes, but retreated in the presence of journalists.
Revised:  In April 2006, Kazakh authorities had tried to bulldoze the homes, but retreated in the presence of journalists.
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Original:  "Recent steps against the Hare Krishnas and members of other religious communities indicate that the government of Kazakhstan, regrettably, is moving in the wrong direction with regard to respecting the universal right to freedom of religion or belief," said Felice D. Gaer, chair of the independent federal panel.
Revised:  "Recent steps against the Hare Krishnas and members of other religious communities indicate that the government of Kazakhstan, regrettably, is moving in the wrong direction with regard to respecting the universal right to freedom of religion or belief," said Felice D. Gaer, chair 
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Original: Flag of Kazakhstan The American Embassy in Kazakhstan has condemned the destruction by Kazakh riot police of eleven homes within a Hare Krishna village.
Revised: Flag of Kazakhstan The in Kazakhstan has condemned the destruction by Kazakh riot police of eleven homes within a Hare Krishna village.
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Original:  In London , some 10,000 members of Britain's Hindu community protested the demolition of the Hare Krishna property in Kazakhstan.
Revised:  In , some 10,000 members of Britain's Hindu community protested the demolition of the Hare Krishna property in Kazakhstan.
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Original:  In London , some 10,000 members of Britain's Hindu community protested the demolition of the Hare Krishna property in Kazakhstan.
Revised:  In London , some 10,000 members of Britain's community protested the demolition of the Hare Krishna property in Kazakhstan.
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Original:  "Recent steps against the Hare Krishnas and members of other religious communities indicate that the government of Kazakhstan, regrettably, is moving in the wrong direction with regard to respecting the universal right to freedom of religion or belief," said Felice D. Gaer, chair of the Commission   
Revised:  "Recent steps against the Hare Krishnas and members of other religious communities indicate that the government of Kazakhstan, regrettably, is moving in the wrong direction with regard to respecting the universal right to freedom of religion or belief," said Felice D. Gaer, chair of the Commission . 
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Original:  "Recent steps against the Hare Krishnas and members of other religious communities indicate that the government of Kazakhstan, regrettably, is moving in the wrong direction with regard to respecting the universal right to freedom of religion or belief," said Felice D. Gaer, chair of the Commission   
Revised:  "Recent steps against the Hare Krishnas and members of other religious communities indicate that the government of Kazakhstan, regrettably, is moving in the wrong direction with regard to respecting the universal right to freedom of religion or belief," said Felice D. Gaer, chair of the Commission Sister link
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Original: There are suppositions that the US Democratic Congress is possible to re-establish the luxury taxes, which were already once introduced in 1990's .
Revised: There are suppositions that the US Democratic Congress may re-establish the luxury taxes, which were already once introduced in 1990's .
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Original: There are suppositions that the US Democratic Congress is possible to re-establish the luxury taxes, which were already once introduced in 1990's .
Revised: There are suppositions that the US Democratic Congress is possible to re-establish the luxury taxes, which were already once introduced in the 1990s .
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Original:  The suppositions resulted in the National Association of Watch and Clock Collectors submitting a report on various tax issues.
Revised:  The suppositions resulted in the National Association of Watch and Clock Collectors commissioning a report on various tax issues.
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Original:  Such material goods as jewelry (watches) , expensive furs ;
Revised:  Material goods such as jewelry, watches , expensive furs ;
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Original:  means of transport, as (jet ) planes, boats, yachts  and luxury cars were already subjected to additional taxes back in 1990.
Revised:  means of transport, as (jet ) planes, boats, yachts , and luxury cars were already subjected to additional taxes back in 1990.
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Original:  means of transport, as (jet ) planes, boats, yachts  and luxury cars were already subjected to additional taxes back in 1990.
Revised:  means of transport, as (jet ) planes, boats, yachts and luxury cars had already been subjected to additional taxes back in 1990.
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Original:  After 3 years the luxury taxes were banned , though the luxury automobiles tax was still active for the next 13 years.
Revised:  After 3 years these taxes were repealed , though the luxury automobiles tax was still active for the next 13 years.
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Original:  DeArment, the representative of w: Covington and Covington and Burling, was the one to guide the report, which actually started the rumors about this particular tax.
Revised:  DeArment, a representative of law firm and lobbyist Covington and Burling, was the one to guide the report, which actually started the rumors about this particular tax.
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Original:  The luxury tax could produce very unpredictable effects for the watches' industry and the report was meant to inform the members of this branch about the effects of these taxes on this luxury goods' industry
Revised:  The luxury tax could produce very unpredictable effects for the watch industry and the report was meant to inform the members of this branch about the effects of these taxes on this luxury goods' industry
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Original:  It also stated tat although its ravaging effect on employment in several industries was sensible, "the turnover that occurred in Congress made it possible for the new group to learn the same lessons again".
Revised:  It also stated that although its ravaging effect on employment in several industries was sensible, "the turnover that occurred in Congress made it possible for the new group to learn the same lessons again".
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Original:  Now, in a surprise announcement Friday, the grandmaster of them all said he will retire.
Revised:  In a surprise announcement Friday, the grandmaster of them all said he will retire.
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Original:  Now, in a surprise announcement Friday, the grandmaster of them all said he will retire.
Revised:  Now, in a surprise announcement Friday, the grandmaster said he will retire.
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Original:  Alternately known as brash, emotional and brilliant, the maverich Kasparov could be a formidable opponent in the realm of politics.
Revised:  Alternately known as brash, emotional and brilliant, the maverick Kasparov could be a formidable opponent in the realm of politics.
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Original:  He will partner with the the russian group known as the Committee of 8 , whose members are attempting to influence the upcoming 2008  election that will replace Putin who is now in his final term .
Revised:  He will partner with the the Russian group known as the Committee of 8 , whose members are attempting to influence the upcoming 2008 election that will replace Putin who is now in his final term .
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Original:  He will partner with the the russian group known as the Committee of 8 , whose members are attempting to influence the upcoming 2008  election that will replace Putin who is now in his final term .
Revised:  He will partner with the the russian group known as the Committee of Eight , whose members are attempting to influence the upcoming 2008 election that will replace Putin who is now in his final term .
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Original:  He will partner with the the russian group known as the Committee of 8 , whose members are attempting to influence the upcoming 2008  election that will replace Putin who is now in his final term .
Revised:  He will partner with the the russian group known as the Committee of 8 , whose members are attempting to influence the 2008 election that will replace Putin who is now in his final term .
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Original:  He will partner with the the russian group known as the Committee of 8 , whose members are attempting to influence the upcoming 2008  election that will replace Putin who is now in his final term .
Revised:  He will partner with the the russian group known as the Committee of 8 , whose members are attempting to influence the upcoming 2008 election that will replace Putin .
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Original:  The champion said he also wants to write books, with chess being among the subjects, but  will not play any more at the professional level , but rather just “dabble” in speed chess if at all .
Revised:  The champion said he also wants to write books, with chess being among the subjects, but he will not play any more at the professional level , but rather just “dabble” in speed chess if at all .
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Original:  The champion said he also wants to write books, with chess being among the subjects, but  will not play any more at the professional level , but rather just “dabble” in speed chess if at all .
Revised:  The champion said he also wants to write books, with chess being among the subjects, but will not play any more at the professional level .
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Original:  The upset was not enough to take away his victory laurels, but the timing of his announcement came after being bitterly stung in defeat.
Revised:  The upset did not take away his victory laurels, but the timing of his announcement came after being bitterly stung in defeat.
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