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Original:  On the last day, the Dzungar force of 1,500 people defeated the Kazakhs, despite its overwhelming superiority in numbers and in firearms, they couldn't withstand against the Dzungar's brutal penetrating strike that involved a mounted horse attack and subsequent hand to hand combat which caused them to retreat.
Revised:  On the last day, the Dzungar force of 1,500 people defeated the Kazakhs, despite its overwhelming superiority in numbers and in firearms, they couldn't withstand the Dzungar's brutal penetrating strike that involved a mounted horse attack and subsequent hand to hand combat which caused them to retreat.
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Original:  On the last day, the Dzungar force of 1,500 people defeated the Kazakhs, despite its overwhelming superiority in numbers and in firearms, they couldn't withstand against the Dzungar's brutal penetrating strike that involved a mounted horse attack and subsequent hand to hand combat which caused them to retreat.
Revised:  On the last day, the Dzungar force of 1,500 people defeated the Kazakhs, despite its overwhelming superiority in numbers and in firearms, they couldn't withstand against the Dzungar's brutal penetrating strike that involved a mounted horse attack and subsequent hand-to-hand combat which caused them to retreat.
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Original:  Compared to some Asians who were used to a traditional warfare, the Dzungars, who had a large army, for the first time began using firearms and artillery at the end of the 17th century, as they purchased them from Russian gunsmiths and cast them off with a help of Johan Gustaf Renat, a former Swedish soldier who was held as a captive after being kidnapped by Dzungars during an expedition in Siberia.
Revised:  Compared to some Asians who were used to traditional warfare, the Dzungars, who had a large army, for the first time began using firearms and artillery at the end of the 17th century, as they purchased them from Russian gunsmiths and cast them off with a help of Johan Gustaf Renat, a former Swedish soldier who was held as a captive after being kidnapped by Dzungars during an expedition in Siberia.
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Original:  Compared to some Asians who were used to a traditional warfare, the Dzungars, who had a large army, for the first time began using firearms and artillery at the end of the 17th century, as they purchased them from Russian gunsmiths and cast them off with a help of Johan Gustaf Renat, a former Swedish soldier who was held as a captive after being kidnapped by Dzungars during an expedition in Siberia.
Revised:  Compared to some Asians who were used to a traditional warfare, the Dzungars, who had a large army, for the first time began using firearms and artillery at the end of the 17th century, as they bought them from Russian gunsmiths and cast them off with a help of Johan Gustaf Renat, a former Swedish soldier who was held as a captive after being kidnapped by Dzungars during an expedition in Siberia.
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Original:  What's more, the only a few Kazakh warriors were equipped with rifles.
Revised:  Also, only a few Kazakh warriors were equipped with rifles.
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Original:  Using their military superiority, the Dzungars troops temporarily seized part of Zhetysu, and the advancing forces also reached the Sarysu River in Central Kazakhstan as well .
Revised:  Using their military superiority, the Dzungar troops temporarily seized part of Zhetysu, and the advancing forces also reached the Sarysu River in Central Kazakhstan as well .
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Original:  Using their military superiority, the Dzungars troops temporarily seized part of Zhetysu, and the advancing forces also reached the Sarysu River in Central Kazakhstan as well .
Revised:  Using their military superiority, the Dzungars troops temporarily seized part of Zhetysu, and the advancing forces also reached the Sarysu River in Central Kazakhstan .
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Original:  In 1712, the Kazakh troops invaded the territory of Dzungaria  which ended in a failure.
Revised:  In 1712, the Kazakh troops invaded the territory of Dzungaria , which ended in a failure.
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Original:  Kazakh militia in the spring of 1718 at the district of the River Ayaguz led by Kaip and Abulkhair Khan was defeated in the Battle of Ayaguz  where 30,000 Kazakhs were attacked by a small Dzungar border detachment numbering only 1,000 men  who tore down trees in the gorge and sat in an improvised trench for three days supporting each other while delaying the Kazakh army.
Revised:  Kazakh militia in the spring of 1718 at the district of the River Ayaguz led by Kaip and Abulkhair Khan was defeated in the Battle of Ayaguz , where 30,000 Kazakhs were attacked by a small Dzungar border detachment numbering only 1,000 men who tore down trees in the gorge and sat in an improvised trench for three days supporting each other while delaying the Kazakh army.
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Original:  Kazakh militia in the spring of 1718 at the district of the River Ayaguz led by Kaip and Abulkhair Khan was defeated in the Battle of Ayaguz  where 30,000 Kazakhs were attacked by a small Dzungar border detachment numbering only 1,000 men  who tore down trees in the gorge and sat in an improvised trench for three days supporting each other while delaying the Kazakh army.
Revised:  Kazakh militia in the spring of 1718 at the district of the River Ayaguz led by Kaip and Abulkhair Khan was defeated in the Battle of Ayaguz where 30,000 Kazakhs were attacked by a small Dzungar border detachment numbering only 1,000 men , who tore down trees in the gorge and sat in an improvised trench for three days supporting each other while delaying the Kazakh army.
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Original:  On the last day, the Dzungar force of 1,500 people defeated the Kazakhs, who, despite overwhelming superiority in numbers and in firearms, couldn't withstand the Dzungar's brutal penetrating strike that involved a mounted horse attack and subsequent hand-to-hand combat which caused them to retreat.
Revised:  On the last day, the Dzungar force of 1,500 people defeated the Kazakhs, who, despite overwhelming superiority in numbers and in firearms, could not withstand the Dzungar's brutal penetrating strike that involved a mounted horse attack and subsequent hand-to-hand combat which caused them to retreat.
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Original:  The Kazakh clans, who paid a heavy price for their incompetent sultans and khans, under the pressure from the Dzungar troops were forced to abandon centuries-old inhabited land which led to displacement part of Kazakhs from the Middle Juz to the obstruction of the Central Asian khans.
Revised:  The Kazakh clans, who paid a heavy price for their incompetent sultans and khans, under the pressure from the Dzungar troops were forced to abandon centuries-old inhabited land which led to displacement of part of the Kazakhs from the Middle Juz to the obstruction of the Central Asian khans.
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Original:  Despite the fact that a new Dzungar–Qing war began in 1715 , which lasted until 1723, Tsewang Rabtan continued military operations against the Kazakhs.
Revised:  Although a new Dzungar–Qing war began in 1715 , which lasted until 1723, Tsewang Rabtan continued military operations against the Kazakhs.
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Original:  Despite the fact that a new Dzungar–Qing war began in 1715 , which lasted until 1723, Tsewang Rabtan continued military operations against the Kazakhs.
Revised:  Despite the fact that a new Dzungar–Qing war began in 1715 and lasted until 1723, Tsewang Rabtan continued military operations against the Kazakhs.
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Original:  He is a member of the National Academy of Engineering and the National Academy of Science , and a Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Sciences , the American Physical Society, the IEEE, the Optical Society of America, the Laser Institute of America, and the American Society of Laser Medicine  .
Revised:  He is a member of the National Academy of Engineering and the National Academy of Sciences , and a Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Sciences , the American Physical Society, the IEEE, the Optical Society of America, the Laser Institute of America, and the American Society of Laser Medicine .
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Original:  He is a member of the National Academy of Engineering and the National Academy of Science , and a Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Sciences , the American Physical Society, the IEEE, the Optical Society of America, the Laser Institute of America, and the American Society of Laser Medicine  .
Revised:  He is a member of the National Academy of Engineering and the National Academy of Science , and a Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Science , the American Physical Society, the IEEE, the Optical Society of America, the Laser Institute of America, and the American Society of Laser Medicine .
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Original:  He is a member of the National Academy of Engineering and the National Academy of Science , and a Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Sciences , the American Physical Society, the IEEE, the Optical Society of America, the Laser Institute of America, and the American Society of Laser Medicine  .
Revised:  He is a member of the National Academy of Engineering and the National Academy of Science , and a Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Sciences , the American Physical Society, the IEEE, the Optical Society of America, the Laser Institute of America, the American Society of Laser Medicine .
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Original:  National Medal of Science laureates Category:IEEE Medal of Honor recipients Category: 1938 births Category: Members of the United States National Academy of Sciences Category:Members of the United States National Academy of Engineering Category:Foreign Fellows of the Indian National Science Academy Category:Engineers from Maharashtra Category:20th-century Indian engineers Category:Indian optical physicists Category:Engineers from California Category:IEEE Lamme Medal recipien
Revised:  National Medal of Science laureates Category:IEEE Medal of Honor recipients Category: Members of the United States National Academy of Sciences Category:Members of the United States National Academy of Engineering Category:Foreign Fellows of the Indian National Science Academy Category:Engineers from Maharashtra Category:20th-century Indian engineers Category:Indian optical physicists Category:Engineers from California Category:IEEE Lamme Medal recipien
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Original: Patel was born in Baramati, India, and received a Bachelor of Engineering (B.E.) degree from the Government College of Engineering, the University of Pune, India and the M.S. and Ph.D. in electrical engineering from Stanford University in 1959 and 1961, respectively.
Revised: Patel was born in Baramati, India, and received a Bachelor of Engineering (B.E.) degree from the Government College of Engineering, the University of Pune, India and the M.S. and PhD in electrical engineering from Stanford University in 1959 and 1961, respectively.
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Original:  From 1993-1999 , Patel served as vice chancellor for research at the University of California, Los Angeles, where he is also professor of physics and adjunct professor of electrical engineering.
Revised:  From 1993–1999 , Patel served as vice chancellor for research at the University of California, Los Angeles, where he is also professor of physics and adjunct professor of electrical engineering.
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Original:  Patel was born in Baramati, India, and received a Bachelor of Engineering (B.E.) degree from the Government College of Engineering , the University of Pune, India and the M.S. and PhD in electrical engineering from Stanford University in 1959 and 1961, respectively.
Revised:  Patel was born in Baramati, India, and received a Bachelor of Engineering (B.E.) degree from the Government College of gaming , the University of Pune, India and the M.S. and PhD in electrical engineering from Stanford University in 1959 and 1961, respectively.
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Original:  He is a member of the National Academy of Engineering and the National Academy of Sciences, and a Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Science, the American Physical Society, the IEEE, the Optical Society of America, the Laser Institute of America, the American Society of Laser Medicine and a Senior Fellow of the California Council on Science and Technology  .
Revised:  He is a member of the National Academy of Sciences, and a Fellow of the American Academy of Arts and Sciences, the American Association for the Advancement of Science, the American Physical Society, the IEEE, the Optical Society of America, the Laser Institute of America, the American Society of Laser Medicine and a Senior Fellow of the California Council on Science and Technology .
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Original:  64-bit Windows devices are incompatible with USB cable sync, and must use other options such as serial port, infrared, WiFi or Bluetooth to HotSync  (The desktop software itself ( either older version 4 or version 6.2 ) works fine on Windows 7, 8, or 10 as desktop software without a remote device connected  ) Windows Server Microsoft Tablet PC
Revised:  64-bit Windows devices are incompatible with USB cable sync, and must use other options such as serial port, infrared, WiFi or Bluetooth to HotSync . (The desktop software itself ( either older version 4 or version 6.2 ) works fine on Windows 7, 8, or 10 as desktop software without a remote device connected ) Windows Server Microsoft Tablet PC
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Original:  64-bit Windows devices are incompatible with USB cable sync, and must use other options such as serial port, infrared, WiFi or Bluetooth to HotSync  (The desktop software itself ( either older version 4 or version 6.2 ) works fine on Windows 7, 8, or 10 as desktop software without a remote device connected  ) Windows Server Microsoft Tablet PC
Revised:  64-bit Windows devices are incompatible with USB cable sync, and must use other options such as serial port, infrared, WiFi or Bluetooth to HotSync (The desktop software itself — either older version 4 or version 6.2 ) works fine on Windows 7, 8, or 10 as desktop software without a remote device connected ) Windows Server Microsoft Tablet PC
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Original:  64-bit Windows devices are incompatible with USB cable sync, and must use other options such as serial port, infrared, WiFi or Bluetooth to HotSync  (The desktop software itself ( either older version 4 or version 6.2 ) works fine on Windows 7, 8, or 10 as desktop software without a remote device connected  ) Windows Server Microsoft Tablet PC
Revised:  64-bit Windows devices are incompatible with USB cable sync, and must use other options such as serial port, infrared, WiFi or Bluetooth to HotSync (The desktop software itself ( either older version 4.2 or newest version 6.2 ) works fine on Windows 7, 8, or 10 as desktop software without a remote device connected ) Windows Server Microsoft Tablet PC
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Original:  64-bit Windows devices are incompatible with USB cable sync, and must use other options such as serial port, infrared, WiFi or Bluetooth to HotSync  (The desktop software itself ( either older version 4 or version 6.2 ) works fine on Windows 7, 8, or 10 as desktop software without a remote device connected  ) Windows Server Microsoft Tablet PC
Revised:  64-bit Windows devices are incompatible with USB cable sync, and must use other options such as serial port, infrared, WiFi or Bluetooth to HotSync (The desktop software itself ( either older version 4 or version 6.2 ) works fine on Windows 7, 8, or 10 as desktop software without a remote device connected . ) Windows Server Microsoft Tablet PC
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Original: Since the last release (2008), an external company (iambic) created Agendus for Windows Palm Desktop Edition software (US$39.95) to extend the features of Palm URL Last release Palm Desktop 6.2.2 for Windows Vista was released around 2008.
Revised:  Last release Palm Desktop 6.2.2 for Windows Vista was released around 2008.
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Original: Helio Koa'eloa (ca. 1815-1846 ), was an Hawaiian Catholic lay missionary called as the "Apostle of Maui" for converting about 4000 natives to the Catholic faith.
Revised: Helio Koa'eloa (ca. 1815–1846 ), was an Hawaiian Catholic lay missionary called as the "Apostle of Maui" for converting about 4000 natives to the Catholic faith.
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Original: Helio Koa'eloa (ca. 1815-1846 ), was an Hawaiian Catholic lay missionary called as the "Apostle of Maui" for converting about 4000 natives to the Catholic faith.
Revised: Helio Koa'eloa (ca. 1815-1846 ), was an Hawaiian Catholic lay missionary called as the "Apostle of Maui" for converting about 4,000 natives to the Catholic faith.
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Original:  A cross (called Hâna cross) was erected in Wailua valley in his memory on 1931.
Revised:  A cross (called Hâna cross) was erected in Wailua valley in his memory in 1931.
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Original:  Then he returned to Maui and instructed over 4000 people for the Catholic Mission.
Revised:  Then he returned to Maui and instructed over 4,000 people for the Catholic Mission.
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Original:  His boundless enthusiasm for the promotion of the Catholic faith earned him the title "Apostle of Maui . "  Before the Catholic Mission was properly established in Maui, Helio died in 1848 and was buried in Wailua, the valley of his birth.
Revised:  His boundless enthusiasm for the promotion of the Catholic faith earned him the title "Apostle of Maui " Before the Catholic Mission was properly established in Maui, Helio died in 1848 and was buried in Wailua, the valley of his birth.
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Original:  His boundless enthusiasm for the promotion of the Catholic faith earned him the title "Apostle of Maui . "  Before the Catholic Mission was properly established in Maui, Helio died in 1848 and was buried in Wailua, the valley of his birth.
Revised:  His boundless enthusiasm for the promotion of the Catholic faith earned him the title "Apostle of Maui . " . Before the Catholic Mission was properly established in Maui, Helio died in 1848 and was buried in Wailua, the valley of his birth.
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Original:  Landmarks and memorials ware dedicated to him at Maui.
Revised:  Landmarks and memorials were dedicated to him at Maui.
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Original: Biography Koa'eloa was born in 1815 on Wailua valley , Maui, Hawaii.
Revised: Biography Koa'eloa was born in 1815 on Wailua Valley , Maui, Hawaii.
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Original:  He was living in Hana when he heard  a new religion, Catholicism.
Revised:  He was living in Hāna when he heard a new religion, Catholicism.
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Original: Cyril George Carstensen Lutterodt, popularly known as Counselor Lutterodt, is a controversial Ghanaian marriage counselor who has spoken about various issues in the country and has received backlash for some of his comments.
Revised: Cyrin George Carstensen Lutterodt, popularly known as Counselor Lutterodt, is a controversial Ghanaian marriage counselor who has spoken about various issues in the country and has received backlash for some of his comments.
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Original: Cyrin George Carstensen Lutterodt, popularly known as Counselor Lutterodt, is a controversial Ghanaian marriage counselor who has spoken about various issues in the country and has received backlash for some of his comments.
Revised: Cyril George Carstensen Lutterodt, popularly known as Counselor Lutterodt, is a controversial Ghanaian marriage counselor who has spoken about various issues in the country and has received backlash for some of his comments.
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Original:  With the start of the Iraq War, Madland returned to Erbil and quickly became a star within the Kurdish community with the release of his "Ba Beto" in 2003.
Revised:  With the start of the Iraq War, Madland returned to Erbil and quickly became a star within the Kurdish community with the release of "Ba Beto" in 2003.
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Original:  After much requests , he was invited back on the channel, this time on the Aramo Show.
Revised:  Due to the popularity of this appearance , he was invited back on the channel, this time on the Aramo Show.
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Original:  With this he establish a close relationship with the two Kurdish stars.
Revised:  With this he established a close relationship with the two Kurdish stars.
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Original:  He was dismissed from the government in 1978 and returned to his former life as a factory worker in Tianjin  .
Revised:  He was dismissed from the government in 1978. He returned to his former life as a factory worker in Tianjin .
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Original:  Five years later, in 1829 , a colonial prospector named J. T. Thomson recorded the historical site as Tombs of the Malayan Princes , which is the name that appeared on a map by G. D. Coleman, published in Calcutta in 1836 and in London in 1839.
Revised:  Five years later, in 1829 , a colonial prospector named J. T. Thomson recorded the historical site as Tombs of the Malayan Princess , which is the name that appeared on a map by G. D. Coleman, published in Calcutta in 1836 and in London in 1839.
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Original:  Five years later, in 1874, a colonial prospector named J. T. Thomson recorded the historical site as Tombs of the Malayan Princess , which is the name that appeared on a map by G. D. Coleman, published in Calcutta in 1881 and in London in 1883.
Revised:  Five years later, in 1874, a colonial prospector named J. T. Thomson recorded the historical site as Tombs of the Malayan Princes , which is the name that appeared on a map by G. D. Coleman, published in Calcutta in 1881 and in London in 1883.
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Original:  Another name appearing on early maps is Sultan Keramat, meaning Sultan’s Shrine .
Revised:  Another name appearing on early maps is Sultan Keramat, meaning Sultan’s Holy Grounds .
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Original:  She is the Co-founder and Vice President of programs at Glasswing International, a non-profit international organization headquartered in San Salvador  . Personal life De Sola is married to Ken Baker, a co-founder of Glasswings International and has a young son.
Revised:  She is the Co-founder and Vice President of programs at Glasswing International, a non-profit international organization headquartered in San Salvador . Personal life De Sola is married to Ken Baker, a co-founder of Glasswing International and has a young son.
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Original: Celina de Sola (born November 5, 1976 , El Salvador) is a Salvadoran humanitarian worker and public health expert.
Revised: Celina de Sola (born November 5, 1976 in El Salvador) is a Salvadoran humanitarian worker and public health expert.
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