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Original:  According to the Premises Manager, Lockheed Martin's lease on their Carlisle Place offices expires in less than two years time , at which point Lockheed will most likely not renew their leaseand will relocate due to their location now becoming public knowledge, making it a target for protests, actions and singing
Revised:  According to the Premises Manager, Lockheed Martin's lease on their Carlisle Place offices expires in less than two years time , at which point Lockheed will most likely not renew their leaseand will relocate due to their location now becoming public knowledge, and a target for protests, actions and singing
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Original:  According to the Premises Manager, Lockheed Martin's lease on their Carlisle Place offices expires in less than two years time , at which point Lockheed will most likely not renew their leaseand will relocate due to their location now becoming public knowledge, making it a target for protests, actions and singing
Revised:  According to the Premises Manager, Lockheed Martin's lease on their Carlisle Place offices expires in less than two years time , at which point Lockheed will most likely not renew their leaseand will relocate due to their location now becoming public knowledge, making it a target for further demonstrations
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Original:  Lockheed will likely not renew the lease, instead relocating due to the location becoming public knowledge, and a target for further demonstrations  
Revised:  Lockheed will likely not renew the lease, instead relocating due to the location becoming public knowledge, and a target for further demonstrations . 
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Original: Fourteen peace activists from pressure group Trident Ploughshares, dressed mainly in Santa hats, with the occasional nuclear weapons inspector or reindeer, descended upon the low-key  UK Headquarters of American arms giant Lockheed Martin, based in London Victoria, on Thursday.
Revised: Fourteen peace activists from pressure group Trident Ploughshares, dressed mainly in Santa hats, with the occasional nuclear weapons inspector or reindeer, descended upon the low-key UK Headquarters of American arms giant w:Lockheed Martin|Lockheed Martin on Thursday.
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Original: Fourteen peace activists from pressure group Trident Ploughshares, dressed mainly in Santa hats, with the occasional nuclear weapons inspector or reindeer, descended upon the low-key London (Victoria) based UK Headquarters of American arms giant w:Lockheed Martin| Lockheed Martin on Thursday.
Revised: Fourteen peace activists from pressure group Trident Ploughshares, dressed mainly in Santa hats, with the occasional nuclear weapons inspector or reindeer, descended upon the low-key London based UK Headquarters of American arms giant w:Lockheed Martin| Lockheed Martin on Thursday.
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Original: Fourteen peace activists from pressure group Trident Ploughshares, dressed mainly in Santa hats, with the occasional nuclear weapons inspector or reindeer, descended upon the low-key London (Victoria) based UK Headquarters of American arms giant w:Lockheed Martin| Lockheed Martin on Thursday.
Revised: Fourteen peace activists from pressure group Trident Ploughshares, dressed mainly in Santa hats, with the occasional nuclear weapons inspector or reindeer, descended upon the low-key London (Victoria) based UK Headquarters of American arms giant Lockheed Martin on Thursday.
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Original:  This holiday season we will start to provide Canadians with the competitive choice that they want and deserve," said Anthony Lacavera, Chairman and CEO of Globalive Communications Corporation, in a release sent out today   
Revised:  This holiday season we will start to provide Canadians with the competitive choice that they want and deserve," said Anthony Lacavera, Chairman and CEO of Globalive Communications Corporation, in a release sent out today . 
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Original:  The UNHCR says the situation in  Saada province remains particularly tense as more people arrive there.
Revised:  The UNHCR says the situation in the Saada province remains particularly tense as more people arrive there.
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Original:  The U.N. refugee agency reports clashes have broken out in a number of districts in  Saada province as more people arrive.
Revised:  The U.N. refugee agency reports clashes have broken out in a number of districts in the Saada province as more people arrive.
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Original:  It says the situation in  Razeh district is particularly serious.
Revised:  It says the situation in the Razeh district is particularly serious.
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Original:  UNHCR spokesman Mahecic says the number of IDPs settling with local populations outside the camps has increased as well.
Revised:  Mahecic says the number of IDPs settling with local populations outside the camps has increased as well.
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Original: New York's Metropolitan Transportation Authority is proposing to make service cuts to close it's expected US$343 million (€234m, GBP £211m) budget deficit.
Revised: New York's Metropolitan Transportation Authority is proposing to make service cuts to close its expected US$343 million (€234m, GBP £211m) budget deficit.
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Original: Middle-east communication satellite provider Arabsat stated Thursday that they have put the Arabic news channel  Al-Alam  back on the air.
Revised: Middle East communication satellite provider Arabsat stated Thursday that they have put the Arabic news channel Al-Alam back on the air.
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Original: Middle-east communication satellite provider Arabsat stated Thursday that they have put the Arabic news channel  Al-Alam  back on the air.
Revised: Middle-east communication satellite provider Arabsat stated Thursday that they have put the Arabic news channel w: Al-Alam back on the air.
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Original:  The Iranian based channel was previously taken off the air in November by two Arab satellite providers  Arabsat and Nilesat  without an explanation.
Revised:  The Iranian-based channel was previously taken off the air in November by two Arab satellite providers Arabsat and Nilesat without an explanation.
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Original:  The Iranian based channel was previously taken off the air in November by two Arab satellite providers  Arabsat and Nilesat  without an explanation.
Revised:  The Iranian based channel was previously taken off the air in November by two Arab satellite providers , Arabsat and Nilesat without an explanation.
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Original:  The Iranian based channel was previously taken off the air in November by two Arab satellite providers  Arabsat and Nilesat  without an explanation.
Revised:  The Iranian based channel was previously taken off the air in November by two Arab satellite providers Arabsat and Nilesat , without an explanation.
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Original:  The move was slammed by many in the middle-east including locals and prominent figures stating freedom of speech .
Revised:  The move was criticised by many in the middle-east including locals and prominent figures stating freedom of speech .
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Original:  The move was slammed by many in the middle-east including locals and prominent figures stating freedom of speech .
Revised:  The move was slammed by many in the Middle East including locals and prominent figures stating freedom of speech .
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Original:  The move was slammed by many in the middle-east including locals and prominent figures stating freedom of speech .
Revised:  The move was slammed by many in the middle-east including locals and prominent figures .
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Original:  It is still not known why the two satellite providers took the channel off the air but political experts suggested it was a political move against the Islamic Republic of Iran.
Revised:  It is still not known why the two satellite providers took the channel off the air but political experts suggested it was a political move against Iran.
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Original: Al Alam News NetworkLogo Middle East communication satellite provider Arabsat stated Thursday that they have put the Arabic news channel w: Al-Alam News NetworkAl-Alam back on the air.
Revised: Al Alam News NetworkLogo Middle East communication satellite provider Arabsat stated Thursday that they have put the Arabic news channel Al-Alam News NetworkAl-Alam back on the air.
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Original: Al Alam News NetworkLogo Middle East communication satellite provider Arabsat stated Thursday that they have put the Arabic news channel w: Al-Alam News NetworkAl-Alam back on the air.
Revised: Al Alam News NetworkLogo Middle East communication satellite provider Arabsat stated Thursday that they have put the Arabic news channel w: Al-Alam back on the air.
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Original: Administrative building of Benet Academy Main entrance of Naperville North High School The Benet Academy Redwings' varsity boys basketball team defeated Naperville North High School Tuesday night after scoring a tie-breaking three-point goal at the buzzer.
Revised: Administrative building of Benet Academy The Benet Academy Redwings' varsity boys basketball team defeated Naperville North High School Tuesday night after scoring a tie-breaking three-point goal at the buzzer.
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Original:   Due to the victory, Benet earned a record of 5-0, while that of Naperville North was 5-1.
Revised:  Main entrance of Naperville North High School Due to the victory, Benet earned a record of 5-0, while that of Naperville North was 5-1.
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Original:  Junior guard Dave Sobolewski received a pass from Flood  scored a three-point goal at the buzzer, leading Benet to victory as fans stormed the court.
Revised:  Junior guard Dave Sobolewski received a pass from Flood and scored a three-point goal at the buzzer, leading Benet to victory as fans stormed the court.
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Original:  Main entrance of Naperville North High School Due to the victory, Benet earned a record of 5–0, while that of Naperville North was 5–1.
Revised:  Due to the victory, Benet earned a record of 5–0, while that of Naperville North was 5–1.
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Original: With  8.1 seconds left in the game and a tie of 42–42, Benet had possession of the ball and called a timeout.
Revised: With only 8.1 seconds left in the game and a tie of 42–42, Benet had possession of the ball and called a timeout.
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Original: alt=Rep. Abercrombie's photo in 2005|Rep.
Revised: File photo of Congressman Abercrombie's photo in 2005|Rep.
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Original:  A news conference has been scheduled for tomorrow  in which he will announce a formal date for resignation.
Revised:  A news conference is scheduled for tomorrow in which he will announce a formal date for resignation.
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Original:  A news conference has been scheduled for tomorrow  in which he will announce a formal date for resignation.
Revised:  A news conference has been scheduled for tomorrow , in which he will announce a formal date for resignation.
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Original:  A similar Garuda Indonesia jet The ruling was overturned in September, but has only just been published.
Revised:  The ruling was overturned in September, but has only just been published.
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Original:  The investigation by the National Transportation Safety Committee (KNKT) found no mechanical defect and stated that fifteen activations of the Ground Proximity Warning Sysytem had been ignored, but international law made this inadmissible as evidence.
Revised:  The investigation by the National Transportation Safety Committee (KNKT) found no mechanical defect and stated that fifteen activations of the Ground Proximity Warning System had been ignored, but international law made this inadmissible as evidence.
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Original:  The investigation by the National Transportation Safety Committee (KNKT) found no mechanical defect and stated that fifteen activations of the Ground Proximity Warning System had been ignored, but international law made this inadmissible as evidence.
Revised:  The investigation by the National Transportation Safety Committee (KNKT) found no mechanical defect and stated that fifteen activations of the Ground proximity warning system had been ignored, but international law made this inadmissible as evidence.
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Original: The PKK are classed as a terrorist organisation by Turkish authorities, the EU and the United States.
Revised: The PKK are listed as a terrorist organisation by Turkish authorities, the EU and the United States.
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Original:  Turkish nationalists have also been demonstrating, following the killing of seven Turkish soldiers by the PKK in central Turkey on Monday  
Revised:  Turkish nationalists have also been demonstrating, following the killing of seven Turkish soldiers by the PKK in central Turkey on Monday . 
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Original:  The court found it guilty on Friday of supporting violence and being linked to the Kurdish rebel group the Kurdistan Workers Party,  better known as the PKK.
Revised:  The court found it guilty on Friday of supporting violence and being linked to the Kurdistan Workers Party, better known as the PKK.
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Original:  The court found it guilty on Friday of supporting violence and being linked to the Kurdish rebel group the Kurdistan Workers Party,  better known as the PKK.
Revised:  The court found it guilty on Friday of supporting violence and being linked to the Kurdish rebel group the Kurdistan Workers Party, a Kurdish rebel group better known as the PKK.
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Original:  The move has  caused the DTP to announce a boycott of parliament , and sparked violent protests across the country .
Revised:  The move has caused the DTP to announce a boycott of parliament .
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Original:  Tens of thousands of protesters at mutable rallies throughout the Danish capital.
Revised:  Tens of thousands of protesters held multiple rallies throughout the Danish capital.
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Original:  Protesters included  Helen Baxendale, model Helena Christensen and former Irish president Mary Robinson.
Revised:  Protesters included actress Helen Baxendale, model Helena Christensen and former Irish president Mary Robinson.
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Original:  The Copenhagen Summit opened last Monday, and has representatives from nearly 190 nations to discuss caps on green house gas emissions.
Revised:  The Copenhagen Summit opened last Monday, and has representatives from nearly 190 nations to discuss caps on greenhouse gas emissions.
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Original:  The will attempt to cap the green-house gas emissions by 50-90\% by 2050  25-40\% by 2020 for developed nations
Revised:  A draft proposal calls for cuts in greenhouse gas emissions by 50-90\% by 2050 25-40\% by 2020 for developed nations
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Original:  The will attempt to cap the green-house gas emissions by 50-90\% by 2050  25-40\% by 2020 for developed nations
Revised:  The will attempt to cap the green-house gas emissions by 50-90\% by 2050 and 25-40\% by 2020 for developed nations
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Original:  A draft proposal calls for cuts in greenhouse gas emissions by 50–90\% by 2050 and 25–40\% by 2020 for developed nations  
Revised:  A draft proposal calls for cuts in greenhouse gas emissions by 50–90\% by 2050 and 25–40\% by 2020 for developed nations . 
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Original: Ingram, the third consecutive sophomore to win the award for the top American Football in Division , was visibility emotional about receiving the award.
Revised: Ingram, the third consecutive sophomore to win the award for the top American Football player in NCAA Division I , was visibility emotional about receiving the award.
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Original: Ingram, who had 1542 yards rushing and 322 yards receiving this season, emerged as a favorite with Gerhart after front-runners Tim Tebow and Colt McCoy had rough games in their conference title games .
Revised: Ingram, who had 1542 yards rushing and 322 yards receiving this season, emerged as a favorite with Gerhart after front-runners Tim Tebow and Colt McCoy in their conference title games .
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Original:  McCoy, quarterback at the University of Texas and Tebow, quarterback at the University of Florida, were held  to 184 yards against Nebraskaand 247 yards against Alabama through the air , respectively with four interceptions between them.
Revised:  McCoy, quarterback at the University of Texas and Tebow, quarterback at the University of Florida, were held to 184 yards against Nebraskaand 247 yards through the air , respectively with four interceptions between them.
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Original:  Ingram -- who scored 18 touchdowns so far this season -- will meet McCoy in the national title game Jan. 7. A strong performance against Texas propelled defensive-end Ndamukong Suh to the fourth-place spot in the rankings.
Revised:  Ingram -- who scored 18 touchdowns so far this season -- will meet McCoy in the national title game Jan. 7. 
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Original: Ingram, the third consecutive sophomore to win the award for the top American Football player in NCAA Division I, was visibility emotional about receiving the award.
Revised: Ingram, the third consecutive sophomore to win the award for the top American Football player in NCAA Division I, was visibly emotional about receiving the award.
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Original: The third suspect, Rudy Guede, from  Ivory Coast, had previously been convicted of 30 years in prison in a fast-track trial.
Revised: The third suspect, Rudy Guede, from the Ivory Coast, had previously been convicted of 30 years in prison in a fast-track trial.
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Original:  She doesn't even really .
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Original:  The escapees are believed to be affiliated with the Moro Islamic Liberation Front, of whom two are thought to be responsible for the decapitation of a group of soldiers in 2007 
Revised:  The escapees are believed to be affiliated with the Moro Islamic Liberation Front, of whom two are thought to be responsible for the decapitation of a group of soldiers in 2007. 
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Original: At least 31 inmates are believed to have escaped and a further two, including a prison guard, killed after a group of up to 100 Islamic militants stormed a prison in Isabela City  in the southern Philipines .
Revised: At least 31 inmates are believed to have escaped and a further two, including a prison guard, killed after a group of up to 100 Islamic militants stormed a prison in Isabela City in the southern Philippines .
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Original:  There is an ongoing investigation,  
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Original:  There is an ongoing investigation , ” 
Revised:  There is an ongoing investigation . ” 
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Original: At least 31 inmates are believed to have escaped and a further two, including a prison guard, killed after a group of up to 100 Islamic militants stormed a prison in Isabela City on Basilan island in the southern Philippines.
Revised: At least 31 inmates are believed to have escaped and a further two, including a prison guard, killed after a group of up to one hundred Islamic militants stormed a prison in Isabela City on Basilan island in the southern Philippines.
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Original:  The attack occurred shortly before 0200 (local time ) and Al Rasheed Sakalahul, Vice Governor is quoted as saying that "more than half the inmates ... had escaped".
Revised:  The attack occurred shortly before 0200 (local time ) and Al Rasheed Sakalahul, Vice Governor is quoted as saying that "more than half the inmates … had escaped".
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Original:  Sakalahul went on to say “ there is a pursuit operation to get back the escapees.
Revised:  Sakalahul went on to say " there is a pursuit operation to get back the escapees.
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Original:  We still don ’ t know how the gunmen were able to spring out the prisoners.
Revised:  We still don ' t know how the gunmen were able to spring out the prisoners.
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Original:  ” Of those killed, one was a prison guard and the other was a rebel, both killed in the firefight which followed the break in.
Revised:  " Of those killed, one was a prison guard and the other was a rebel, both killed in the firefight which followed the break in.
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Original:  The incident is the third of its type on the island of Basilan in the last five year
Revised:  The incident is the third of its type on the island of Basilan in the last five years
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Original:  Joe McElderry has won the sixth series of the UK X Factor, in a hotly contested final with Olly Murs, after the third finalist, Stacy Solomon was voted off last night.
Revised: left Joe McElderry has won the sixth series of the UK X Factor, in a hotly contested final with Olly Murs, after the third finalist, Stacy Solomon was voted off last night.
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Original: left Joe McElderry has won the sixth series of the UK X Factor, in a hotly contested final with Olly Murs, after the third finalist, Stacy Solomon was voted off last night.
Revised: left Joe McElderry has won the sixth series of the UK X Factor, in a hotly contested final with Olly Murs, after the third finalist, Stacey Solomon was voted off last night.
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Original:  In past years, the X Factor single has always gained that accolade
Revised:  In recent years, the X Factor single has always gained that accolade
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Original:  ]] The weekend's prime time shows are expected to have had more than 18 million viewers, with an estimated £100m of revenue going to ITV from the autumn show.
Revised:  ]] The weekend's prime time shows are expected to have had more than 18 million viewers, with one analyst estimating £100m of revenue going to ITV from the autumn show.
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Original:  The crew of four North Korean nationals ( which have dual citizenship with Kazakhstan) and one Belarusian were arrested on site.
Revised:  The crew of four North Korean nationals ( who have dual citizenship with Kazakhstan) and one Belarusian were arrested on site.
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Original:  Thai PM Abhisit Vejjajiva said to The Times  "They committed two crimes: firstly they gave false information about their cargo, and secondly that cargo was found to be weapons".
Revised:  Thai PM Abhisit Vejjajiva said to The Times : "They committed two crimes: firstly they gave false information about their cargo, and secondly that cargo was found to be weapons".
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Original:  The pilot  Belarusian Mikhail Petukhou  told Thai officials after 6 hours of interrogation that he had no knowledge of the cargo or its origins.
Revised:  The pilot , Belarusian Mikhail Petukhou told Thai officials after 6 hours of interrogation that he had no knowledge of the cargo or its origins.
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Original:  The pilot  Belarusian Mikhail Petukhou  told Thai officials after 6 hours of interrogation that he had no knowledge of the cargo or its origins.
Revised:  The pilot Belarusian Mikhail Petukhou , told Thai officials after 6 hours of interrogation that he had no knowledge of the cargo or its origins.
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Original:  The North Korea arms ban was first imposed in 2006, and strengthened in June, after North Korea tested ballistic missile's and nuclear devices.
Revised:  The North Korea arms ban was first imposed in 2006, and strengthened in June, after North Korea tested ballistic missiles and nuclear devices.
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Original:  North Korea's  profit from arms sales is estimated to be US$1 billion (€684bn, Thai฿3.3t)
Revised:  North Korea's annual profit from arms sales is estimated to be US$1 billion (€684bn, Thai฿3.3t)
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Original:  North Korea is banned from exporting or importing weapons under UN resolution 1874.
Revised:  North Korea is banned from exporting or importing weapons under the UN Security Council resolution 1874.
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