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Original:  Mr Evans says the myriad of complex new laws would create a system where "so-called IR professionals would stand to make a lot of money sorting through it... every economic decision has to go back to some central authority and get ticked off," he said . "There is a lot of that sort of attitude in this legislation and I think it is very unfortunate." Kemalex Plastics owner Richard Colebatch of the HR Nicholls Society said the changes are "very complicated for anybody to decipher...
Revised:  Evans says the myriad of complex new laws would create a system where "so-called IR professionals would stand to make a lot of money sorting through it... every economic decision has to go back to some central authority and get ticked off," he said . "There is a lot of that sort of attitude in this legislation and I think it is very unfortunate." Kemalex Plastics owner Richard Colebatch of the HR Nicholls Society said the changes are "very complicated for anybody to decipher...
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Original:   One, if people are seriously ill, they should be seeing their medical doctor.
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Original: 200px|Australian Minister for Employment and Workplace Relations, Kevin Andrews The Australian Council of Trade Unions (ACTU) has urged the federal opposition Labor Party to focus on industrial relations (IR) as visible changes come into force from Monday 27th March.
Revised: 200px|Australian Minister for Employment and Workplace Relations, Kevin Andrews The Australian Council of Trade Unions (ACTU) has urged the federal opposition Labor Party to focus on industrial relations (IR) as radical changes come into force from Monday 27th March.
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Original:  The new WorkChoices arrangements include scrapping of dismissal rights that some may deem as "unfair" ;
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Original:   secret ballots for industrial action and removal of the no-disadvantage test in new contracts.
Revised:  award-cutting of award rates; secret ballots for industrial action and removal of the no-disadvantage test in new contracts.
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Original:  The union movement has launched a fresh campaign to protest against this week's changes.
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Original:  In November last year, hundreds of thousands of demonstrators rallied across the nation to show dissent of the IR legislation.
Revised:  In November last year, hundreds of thousands of demonstrators rallied across the nation to express dissent of the IR legislation.
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Original:  Ex-Finace Minister, Senator Nick Minchin, said most Australians "violently disagree" with the recent IR changes and there was a real prospect that the High Court could overturn the Work Choices laws.
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Original: 200px|Australian Minister for Employment and Workplace Relations, Kevin Andrews The Australian Council of Trade Unions (ACTU) has urged the federal opposition Labor Party to focus on industrial relations (IR) as large changes come into force from Monday 27th March.
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Original: 150px|right The following is how the medal table looked after the final day of competition for the 2006 Commonwealth Games, in Melbourne, Australia.
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Original:  The games will be officially close tonight, (0900 UTC) with the handing over of the Games to Delhi for 2010 Commonwealth Games.
Revised:  The games will be officially closed tonight, (0900 UTC) with the handing over of the Games to Delhi for 2010 Commonwealth Games.
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Original: There were 247 events , and 24 disciplines in the games.
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Original:  Conduit is currently searching for 320 employees and is intending to employed a further 280 before the year concludes  
Revised:  Conduit is currently searching for 320 employees and is intending to employed a further 280 before the year concludes . 
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Original: In a statement,  described the news as "yet another indication that Welsh government policies are having a beneficial effect supporting the economy and creating jobs during these difficult times", saying he was "delighted that Conduit is yet again expanding its operations in Wales".
Revised: In a statement, of described the news as "yet another indication that Welsh government policies are having a beneficial effect supporting the economy and creating jobs during these difficult times", saying he was "delighted that Conduit is yet again expanding its operations in Wales".
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Original:  This new contract has been created in association with a residential care service provided by  
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Original:  Conduit is currently searching for 320 employees and is intending to employed a further 280 before the year concludes.
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Original:  , Minister for Business, Enterprise, Technology  Science, said she was "pleased that using the economic levers we have at our disposal, such as creating sector-specific enterprise zones, we continue to attract and retain world class business in Wales."
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Original: The new employees will work at Fusion Point, an office area in . Prior to this announcement, Conduit already had in excess of 1900 employees within three Welsh bases in ,  and Cardiff city centre.
Revised: The new employees will work at Fusion Point, an office area in . Prior to this announcement, Conduit already had in excess of 1900 employees within three Welsh bases in , , and Cardiff city centre.
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Original:  Conduit is currently searching for 320 employees and intends to employ a further 280 before the yearconcludes .
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Original: Conduit, a subsidary of the US directory assistance organisation (kgb) , is to create six hundred new jobs in the Welsh capital by the end of 2012.
Revised: Conduit, a subsidary of the US directory assistance organisation , is to create six hundred new jobs in the Welsh capital by the end of 2012.
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Original:  From then on, it will begin the bulk of it's scientific investigations.
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Original: The European Space Agency's (ESA) lunar probe SMART-1 has taken it's first images from a low orbit around the moon, returning images of great detail.
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Original:  The   series of images were taken at an altitude of 5,000 to 1,000 km above the Moon to test the onboard camera.
Revised:  The coupling of the camera and the navigational system will allow more precise mapping of the moon's features than ever before. Using very precise positioning, the system will be able to measure the angles of shadows to such a degree that researchers will be able to build a very accurate topographical map of the moon's surface features. series of images were taken at an altitude of 5,000 to 1,000 km above the Moon to test the onboard camera.
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Original:  The   series of images were taken at an altitude of 5,000 to 1,000 km above the Moon to test the onboard camera.
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Original:  From then on, it will begin the bulk of its scientific investigations 
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Original:  Eighty-five senators voted to approve her accecion while 13 opposed it  .
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Original: The U.S. Senate has voted to accept President  Bush's nomination of Condoleezza Rice as Secretary of State.
Revised: The U.S. Senate has voted to accept President George W. Bush's nomination of Condoleezza Rice as Secretary of State.
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Original: The U.S. Senate has voted to accept President George W. Bush's nomination of Condoleezza Rice as  Secretary of State.
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Original: The U.S. Senate has voted to accept President George W. Bush's nomination of Condoleezza Rice as  Secretary of State.
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Original:  Democratic Senators had criticised Ms Rice during debates on the nomination, but this did not prevent Ms Rice gaining the second-highest ever number of votes for a nominee for Secretary of State.
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Original:  Democratic Senators had criticised Ms Rice during debates on the nomination, but this did not prevent Ms Rice gaining the second-highest ever number of votes for a nominee for Secretary of State.
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Original:  The European Union (EU) has demanded the release of Alexander Kozulin, a Belarussian opposition leader arrested during a protest rally in Minske . Kozulin was one of the leaders in a series of rolling protests against the recent election victory of President Alexander Lukashenko.
Revised:  The European Union (EU) has demanded the release of Alexandr Kozulin, a Belarussian opposition leader arrested during a protest rally in Minske . Kozulin was one of the leaders in a series of rolling protests against the recent election victory of President Alexander Lukashenko.
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Original:  The European Union (EU) has demanded the release of Alexander Kozulin, a Belarussian opposition leader arrested during a protest rally in Minske . Kozulin was one of the leaders in a series of rolling protests against the recent election victory of President Alexander Lukashenko.
Revised:  The European Union (EU) has demanded the release of Alexander Kozulin, a Belarussian opposition leader arrested during a protest rally in Minsk . Kozulin was one of the leaders in a series of rolling protests against the recent election victory of President Alexander Lukashenko.
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Original:  The European Union (EU) has demanded the release of Alexander Kozulin, a Belarussian opposition leader arrested during a protest rally in Minske . Kozulin was one of the leaders in a series of rolling protests against the recent election victory of President Alexander Lukashenko.
Revised:  The European Union (EU) has demanded the release of Alexander Kozulin, a Belarussian opposition leader arrested during a protest rally in Minske . Kozulin was one of the leaders in a series of rolling protests against the recent election victory of President Alexandr Lukashenko.
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Original:  Alexander Milinkevich, Belarus's main opposition leader, praised Belarusians who have been protesting since the election.
Revised:  Alexandr Milinkevich, Belarus's main opposition leader, praised Belarusians who have been protesting since the election.
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Original:  However he acknowledged that their numbers were not enough to defeat Lukashenko's government  
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Original:  The European Union (EU) has demanded the release of Alexandr Kozulin, a Belarussian opposition leader arrested during a protest rally in Minsk.
Revised:  The European Union (EU) has demanded the release of Alexandr Kozulin, a Belarusian opposition leader arrested during a protest rally in Minsk.
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Original:  The EU president is "appalled by the violence used against demonstrators by the Belarussian authorities," it  in a statement.
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Original:  The EU president is "appalled by the violence used against demonstrators by the Belarussian authorities," it  in a statement.
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Original:  Lukashenko meets Putin in August 2005.
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Original:  Ofcom subsequently received at least 2,220 complaints about the incident.
Revised: As a result of this incident, Channel 5 decided to re-examine the compliance and editorial rules set between Channel 5 and The Wright Stuff'''s production company. Channel 5 also committed the major production team members of The Wright Stuff to learning about compliance in greater detail. Ofcom subsequently received at least 2,220 complaints about the incident.
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Original:  A recent status update from 'Report The Wright Stuff  to Ofcom' clarified its administrator's intention to remove the page on Thursday.
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Original:  Channel 5 would later acknowledge that these remarks were "unfortunate, misjudged and entirely inappropriate" . Ofcom subsequently received at least 2,220 complaints about the incident . A page on the social networking website Facebook, entitled 'Report The Wright Stuff to Ofcom', accumulated in excess of 2,500 likes.
Revised:  Channel 5 would later acknowledge that these remarks were "unfortunate, misjudged and entirely inappropriate" Ofcom subsequently received at least 2,220 complaints about the incident . A page on the social networking website Facebook, entitled 'Report The Wright Stuff to Ofcom', accumulated in excess of 2,500 likes.
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Original:  Channel 5 would later acknowledge that these remarks were "unfortunate, misjudged and entirely inappropriate" . Ofcom subsequently received at least 2,220 complaints about the incident . A page on the social networking website Facebook, entitled 'Report The Wright Stuff to Ofcom', accumulated in excess of 2,500 likes.
Revised:  Channel 5 would later acknowledge that these remarks were "unfortunate, misjudged and entirely inappropriate" . . A page on the social networking website Facebook, entitled 'Report The Wright Stuff to Ofcom', accumulated in excess of 2,500 likes.
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Original:  On this edition, presenter employed a false Scottish accent and remarked: "There's been another murder," in reference to the UK crime drama , as the alleged murder was being discussed as part of a newspaper review.
Revised:  On this edition, presenter employed a false Scottish accent and remarked: "There's been another murder," in reference to the UK crime drama , as the murder was being discussed as part of a newspaper review.
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Original:   Paul was warned of the danger by his spotter, but did not ease off as much as other drivers in the section of the track.
Revised:  The team reported that Paul was warned of the danger by his spotter, but did not ease off as much as other drivers in the section of the track.
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Original:  Tony Renna, who was the last death in the league before Dana , was killed in an accident at the Indianapolis Motor Speedway.
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Original:  Tony Renna, who was the last death in the league before Dana , was killed in an accident at the Indianapolis Motor Speedway.
Revised:  Tony Renna, who was the last death in the league before Dana , was killed during a test at the Indianapolis Motor Speedway.
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Original: The Airbus A380, a double decker superjumbo jet, passed its evacuation test in Hamburg, Germany.
Revised: The Airbus A380, a double decker superjumbo jet, in Hamburg, Germany.
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Original:  Thirty-three people were injured during the test, including some with friction burns from sliding down the escape ramps and one with a broken leg.
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Original: Two days later, the American and European aviation authorities (the w:FAA and w: JAA, respectively) officially certified the A380 to carry 853 passengers.
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Original: This test was important to Airbus, as in August 2005 an Airbus 340 overshot the runway and 300 people escaped before the plane burst into flames.
Revised: This test was important to Airbus, as in August 2005 an Airbus A340 overshot the runway and 300 people escaped before the plane burst into flames.
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Original:  Airbus intends to repeat the test  Saturday if the aviation agency fails this attempt.
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Original:  The volunteers, who were paid 60 euros (about  $72 US ) and a meal, were from Airbus staff, sports clubs, and dancing clubs in the Hamburg area where the test took place.
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Original:  The volunteers, who were paid 60 euros (about  $72 US ) and a meal, were from Airbus staff, sports clubs, and dancing clubs in the Hamburg area where the test took place.
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Original:  named Indian Shooting  Samaresh Jung as the winner of the David Dixon Award, for been the Best Athlete of the 18th Commonwealth Games.
Revised:  named Indian Shooting competitor Samaresh Jung as the winner of the David Dixon Award, for been the Best Athlete of the 18th Commonwealth Games.
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Original:  named Indian Shooting  Samaresh Jung as the winner of the David Dixon Award, for been the Best Athlete of the 18th Commonwealth Games.
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Original: During a press conference at 10:15 local Swdeish time, Prime Minister Göran Persson appointed Jan Eliasson as the new Foreign Minister.
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Original:  Eliasson will be taking over the  post from Laila Freivalds, and will have  current Minister for Development Aid , Carin Jämtin , as his Deputy Foreign Minister.
Revised:  Eliasson will be taking over the post from Laila Freivalds, and will have current Minister for Development Aid , as his Deputy Foreign Minister.
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Original:  The company says the USDA threatened criminal prosecution if  proceeded with plans to test nearly 100\% of its beef for Bovine spongiform encephalopathy, also known as mad cow disease or BSE.
Revised:  The company says the USDA threatened criminal prosecution if it proceeded with plans to test nearly 100\% of its beef for Bovine spongiform encephalopathy, also known as mad cow disease or BSE.
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Original: Creekstone Farms Premium Beef, an organic meatpacking company based in Arkansas City, has filled a lawsuit aginst the U.S. Department of Agriculture.
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Original: Creekstone Farms Premium Beef, an organic meatpacking company based in Arkansas City, has filled a lawsuit against the U.S. Department of Agriculture .
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Original:  The company says the USDA threatened criminal prosecution if it proceeded with plans to test nearly 100\% of its beef for Bovine spongiform encephalopathy, also known as mad cow disease or BSE.
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Original:  The USDA 's stated position was that allowing any meatpacking company to test every cow would undermine the agency's official position that random testing was scientifically adequate to assure safety.
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