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Original:  Google Secure Access was created as an independent research project by a Google engineer , after he discovered that secure WiFi was virtually non-existent at most locations.
Revised:  Google Secure Access was created as an independent research project by a Google engineer after he discovered that secure WiFi was virtually non-existent at most locations.
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Original:  Google Secure Access was created as an independent research project by a Google engineer , after he discovered that secure WiFi was virtually non-existent at most locations.
Revised:  Google Secure Access was created as an independent research project by a Google engineer , after he discovered that WiFi was insecure at most locations.
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Original: According to the Google Secure Access FAQ,  service is only available at "certain Google WiFi locations in the San Francisco Bay Area".
Revised: According to the Google Secure Access FAQ, the service is only available at "certain Google WiFi locations in the San Francisco Bay Area".
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Original:  According to some reports, Google Secure Access is working from independent (non-Google) WiFi locations in NYC.
Revised:  According to some reports, the service working from some independent (non-Google) WiFi locations in NYC.
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Original:  In addition to discovering his famous equation, over the course of 5 months in 1905 Einstein layed out the theory of Special Relativity (which led him to the equation E=mc2), proved the existence of atoms and molecules, and showed that light is made of photons.
Revised:  In addition to discovering his famous equation, over the course of 5 months in 1905 Einstein developed the theory of Special Relativity (which led him to the equation E=mc2), proved the existence of atoms and molecules, and showed that light is made of photons.
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Original:  Albert Einstein's best known equation, also probably most famous anything from physics, E=mc2, turns one hundred today.
Revised:  Albert Einstein's best known equation, and probably the best known aspect of all physics, E=mc2, turns one hundred today.
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Original: The Vatican has denied the accusation that it is shielding the alleged war criminal, General Ante Gotovina, claiming they have sought clarification on Ms del Ponte's accusation that the General is being sheltered in a monestery in Croatia.
Revised: The Vatican has denied the accusation that it is shielding the alleged war criminal, General Ante Gotovina, claiming they have sought clarification on Ms del Ponte's accusation that the General is being sheltered in a 
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Original:  The Vatican has denied the accusation that it is shielding the alleged war criminal, General Ante Gotovina, claiming they have sought clarification on Ms del Ponte's accusation that the General is being sheltered in a monastery in Croatia
Revised:  monastery in Croatia
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Original: United Nations Chief War Crimes prosecutor, Carla Del Ponte, prosecutor for the International Criminal Tribunal for the former Yugoslavia has accused the Catholic Church in Croatia of shielding one of the most wanted war criminals of the conflict in the region.
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Original:  The Vatican has denied the accusation that it is shielding the alleged war criminal, General Ante Gotovina, claiming they have sought clarification on Ms del Ponte's accusation that the General is being sheltered in a monastery in Croatia
Revised:  NIGGA STOLE MY COW! 11864162
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Original:  Triton will contain a softphone feature that can be used with TotalTalk . External links AOL TotalTal
Revised:  Triton will contain a softphone feature that can be used with TotalTalk External links AOL TotalTal
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Original:  Triton will contain a softphone feature that can be used with TotalTalk . External links AOL TotalTal
Revised:  Triton will contain a softphone feature that can be used with TotalTalk . 
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Original:    The European Commission has a history of carrying out anti-trust investigations involving technology companies.
Revised:  ... The European Commission has a history of carrying out anti-trust investigations involving technology companies.
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Original:   Google has  been the subject of a number of anti-trust allegations and investigations.
Revised:  Google has previously been the subject of a number of anti-trust allegations and investigations.
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Original:   Google has  been the subject of a number of anti-trust allegations and investigations.
Revised:  Google has been the subject of anti-trust allegations and investigations.
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Original:  United States authorities blocked Google from buying Yahoo!  citing concerns over a near-monopoly in search;
Revised:  United States authorities blocked Google from buying Yahoo! , citing concerns over a near-monopoly in search;
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Original:  Microsoft was ordered to pay substantial penalties for 'bundling' Windows with Windows Media Player and, within the EU, must distribute a version of Windows that does not have said bundled software.
Revised:  Microsoft was ordered to pay substantial penalties for 'bundling' Windows with their Media Player and, within the EU, must distribute a version of Windows that does not have said bundled software.
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Original:  A similar battle was fought over the automatic inclusion of w: Internet Explorer with their operating systems.
Revised:  A similar battle was fought over the automatic inclusion of Internet Explorer with their operating systems.
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Original: The complainants allege price comparison sites receive a lower 'quality score', thus being knocked out of fully automated, unpaid results, or being required to pay more for advertising through  AdWords program.
Revised: The complainants allege price comparison sites receive a lower 'quality score', thus being knocked out of fully automated, unpaid-for results; or, being required to pay more for advertising through AdWords program.
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Original: The complainants allege price comparison sites receive a lower 'quality score', thus being knocked out of fully automated, unpaid results, or being required to pay more for advertising through  AdWords program.
Revised: The complainants allege price comparison sites receive a lower 'quality score', thus being knocked out of fully automated, unpaid results, or being required to pay more for advertising through the search giant's AdWords program.
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Original:  Google rejects Foundem's allegations, arguing the majority of content on price comparison sites is duplicated from other sites, stating the complainant "duplicates 79\% of its website content from other sites, thus adding no value.
Revised:  Google rejects Foundem's allegations, arguing the majority of content on price comparison sites is duplicated from other sites, asserting Foundem "duplicates 79\% of its website content from other sites, thus adding no value.
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Original:   [ ... ] We have consistently informed webmasters that our algorithms disadvantage duplicate sites".
Revised:  [ w ] We have consistently informed webmasters that our algorithms disadvantage duplicate sites".
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Original:   [ ... ] We have consistently informed webmasters that our algorithms disadvantage duplicate sites".
Revised:  [ ... ] e have consistently informed webmasters that our algorithms disadvantage duplicate sites".
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Original:  Microsoft was ordered to pay substantial penalties for 'bundling' Windows with their Media Player and , within the EU, must distribute a version of Windows that does not have said bundled software.
Revised:  Microsoft was ordered to pay substantial penalties for 'bundling' Windows with their Media Player . And , within the EU, must distribute a version of Windows that does not have said bundled software.
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Original: File:View of Schuman Roundabout.jpg|File photo of the Berlaymont building in Brussels, Belgium, headquarters of the European Commission.
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Original:  And , within the EU, they must distribute a version of Windows that does not have said bundled software.
Revised:  And , within the EU, must distribute a version of Windows that does not have said bundled software.
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Original:  The squad will instead target bestiality, urination, defecation, and sadomasochistic behavior, which have a high rate of conviction in jury trials.
Revised:  The squad will target bestiality, urination, defecation, and sadomasochistic behavior, which have a high rate of conviction in jury trials.
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Original:  The squad will  target bestiality, urination, defecation, and sadomasochistic behavior, which have a high rate of conviction in jury trials.
Revised:  The squad will instead target bestiality, urination, defecation, and sadomasochistic behavior, which have a high rate of conviction in jury trials.
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Original: The FBI's Washington Field Office began internally recruiting for a new anti-obscenity squad last month.
Revised: The FBI's Washington Field Office began last month an internal recruitment drive to staff a new anti-obscenity squad last month.
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Original:  The new squad will divert eight agents, a supervisor and assorted support staff to gather evidence against  "manufacturers and purveyors" of pornography  .
Revised:  The new squad will divert eight agents, a supervisor and assorted support staff to gather evidence against the "manufacturers and purveyors" of pornography .
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Original:  The squad will not be concerned with child pornography, but instead focus on pornography that depicts, and is marketed to, consenting adults.
Revised:  The squad would not be concerned with child pornography, but instead focus on pornography that depicts, and is marketed to, consenting adults.
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Original:  The squad will instead target bestiality, urination, defecation, and sadomasochistic behavior, which have a high rate of conviction in jury trials.
Revised:  The squad would target bestiality, urination, defecation, and sadomasochistic behavior, which have a high rate of conviction in jury trials.
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Original:  Gonzales feels that that "adult pornography is a threat to families and children."
Revised:  Gonzales has said that "adult pornography is a threat to families and children."
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Original:  Christian groups, such as the Family Research Council , have criticized Gonzales for his weak stance on abortion, but welcomed the adult pornography initiative with "a growing sense of confidence in our new attorney general."
Revised:  Christian groups, such as the Family Research Council who have criticized Gonzales for his weak stance on abortion, but welcomed the adult pornography initiative with "a growing sense of confidence in our new attorney general."
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Original:  Christian groups, such as the Family Research Council , have criticized Gonzales for his weak stance on abortion, but welcomed the adult pornography initiative with "a growing sense of confidence in our new attorney general."
Revised:  Christian groups, such as the Family Research Council , have criticized Gonzales for his weak stance on abortion, welcomed the initiative with "a growing sense of confidence in our new attorney general."
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Original:  Such companies are refered to as "white-collar pornographers" by christian groups .
Revised:  Such companies are referred to as "white-collar pornographers" by christian groups .
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Original:  Such companies are refered to as "white-collar pornographers" by christian groups .
Revised:  Such companies are refered to as "white-collar pornographers" by christian groups 
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Original:  Christian groups, such as the Family Research Council who have criticized Gonzales for  his weak stance on abortion, welcomed the initiative with "a growing sense of confidence in our new attorney general."
Revised:  Christian groups, such as the Family Research Council who have criticized Gonzales for what they consider his weak stance on abortion, welcomed the initiative with "a growing sense of confidence in our new attorney general."
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Original: According to the British tabloid the Daily Mirror, the American Food and Drug Administration has recalled operational rations (MREs) donated by Britain to help survivors of Hurricane Katrina.
Revised: The American Food and Drug Administration has recalled operational rations (MREs) donated by Britain to help survivors of Hurricane Katrina.
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Original:  The  move has infuriated aid workers who hasten to point out that "Under NATO, American soldiers are also entitled to eat such rations, yet the starving of the American South will see them go up in smoke because of FDA red tape madness."
Revised:  The Nevertheless, the move has infuriated aid workers who hasten to point out that "Under NATO, American soldiers are also entitled to eat such rations, yet the starving of the American South will see them go up in smoke because of FDA red tape madness."
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Original:  One aid worker was quoted as saying  " There will be a cloud of smoke above Little Rock soon - of burned food, of anger and of shame that the world's richest nation couldn't organise a piss-up in a brewery and lets Americans starve while they arrogantly observe petty regulations.
Revised:  One aid worker was quoted as saying that " There will be a cloud of smoke above Little Rock soon - of burned food, of anger and of shame that the world's richest nation couldn't organise a piss-up in a brewery and lets Americans starve while they arrogantly observe petty regulations.
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Original:  One aid worker was quoted as saying  " There will be a cloud of smoke above Little Rock soon - of burned food, of anger and of shame that the world's richest nation couldn't organise a piss-up in a brewery and lets Americans starve while they arrogantly observe petty regulations.
Revised:  One aid worker was quoted as saying " the world's richest nation couldn't organise a piss-up in a brewery and lets Americans starve while they arrogantly observe petty regulations.
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Original:  Food donations from Spain and Italy are also being held by the FDA due to similar concern, as well as thousands of gallons of pear juice from Israel .
Revised:  Food donations from Spain and Italy are also being held by the FDA due to similar concern, as well as thousands of gallons of pear juice from Israel 
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Original:  The Washington Post reported on September 23, 2005, that a spokeswoman for the U.S. Department of Agriculture has denied the Mirror report in reference to their allegation that the FDA is planning to incerate the rations donated by Britain
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Original:  One aid worker was quoted as saying that "the world's richest nation couldn't organise a piss-up in a brewery and lets Americans starve while they arrogantly observe petty regulations.
Revised:  One aid worker was quoted as saying that "the world's richest nation couldn't organize a piss-up in a brewery and lets Americans starve while they arrogantly observe petty regulations.
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Original:  The Washington Post reported, on September 23, 2005, that a spokeswoman for the U.S. Department of Agriculture confirmed that the food was being held at the facility but denied any plans to incerate the rations donated by Britain.
Revised:  The Washington Post reported, on September 23, 2005, that a spokeswoman for the U.S. Department of Agriculture confirmed that the food was being held at the facility but denied any plans to incinerate the rations donated by Britain.
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Original: The Tennessee state Department of Mental Health has ordered the closing of two "ex-gay" ministries operated by Love In Action International Inc., a controversial Christian group that counsels gays to give up homosexuality.
Revised: The Tennessee state Department of Mental Health has ordered the closing of two Ex-gay ministries operated by Love In Action International Inc., a controversial Christian group that counsels gays to give up homosexuality.
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Original:  They feel that "gay men and lesbians who have accepted their sexual orientation positively are better adjusted than those who have not done so," and warn that people seeking conversion therapy may be doing so under pressure from religious groups  
Revised:  They feel that "gay men and lesbians who have accepted their sexual orientation positively are better adjusted than those who have not done so," and warn that people seeking conversion therapy may be doing so under pressure from religious groups . 
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Original:  According to a November, 2003 article by the Pew Forum on Religion and Public Life, the American public is equally divided on the question of whether homosexual orientation can be changed 
Revised:  The American public is equally divided on the question of whether homosexual orientation can be changed 
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Original:  According to a November, 2003 article by the Pew Forum on Religion and Public Life, the American public is equally divided on the question of whether homosexual orientation can be changed 
Revised:  According to a November, 2003 article by the Pew Forum on Religion and Public Life, the American public is evenly divided on the question of whether homosexual orientation can be changed 
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Original:  According to a November, 2003 article by the Pew Forum on Religion and Public Life, the American public is equally divided on the question of whether homosexual orientation can be changed 
Revised:  According to a November, 2003 article by the Pew Forum on Religion and Public Life, the American public is equally divided on the question of whether homosexual orientation can be changed , according to the Pew Forum on Religion and Public Life
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Original: Love in Action has repeatedly drawn fire from gay rights groups who view it as praying upon the fears of religious parents in order to make Christian ministers like Jerry Falwell and Pat Robertson seem more acceptable to the uniformed public.
Revised: Love in Action has repeatedly drawn fire from gay rights groups who view it as preying upon the fears of religious parents in order to make Christian ministers like Jerry Falwell and Pat Robertson seem more acceptable to the uniformed public.
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Original: Love in Action has repeatedly drawn fire from gay rights groups who view it as preying upon the fears of religious parents in order to make Christian ministers like Jerry Falwell and Pat Robertson seem more acceptable to the uniformed public.
Revised: Love in Action has repeatedly drawn fire from gay rights groups who view it as preying upon the fears of religious parents in order to make Christian ministers like Jerry Falwell and Pat Robertson seem more acceptable to the uninformed public.
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Original:  the fiercely independent Spanish judiciary intended to prosecute three US servicemen over the fatality.
Revised:  the Spanish judiciary intended to prosecute three US servicemen over the fatality.
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Original: Repeatedly, concern over Spain's  judiciary invoking 'universal jurisdiction' appears in leaked cables.
Revised: Repeatedly, concern over Spain's independent judiciary invoking 'universal jurisdiction' appears in leaked cables.
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Original:  Reports at the time showed magistrates considered actions at Guantanamo bay torture, and seemed keen to pusue ex-US government officials on grounds of "criminal responsibility".
Revised:  Reports at the time showed magistrates considered actions at Guantanamo Bay torture, and seemed keen to pusue ex-US government officials on grounds of "criminal responsibility".
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Original: The logo of whistleblowing website, Wikileaks Yesterday's release of more US diplomatic cables by Wikileaks covered pressure on Western governments, judiciary, and machinations when buying foreign assistance resolving the fall-out from detentions at Guantanamo Bay.
Revised: The logo of whistleblowing website, Wikileaks Yesterday's release of more US diplomatic cables by Wikileaks covered pressure on Western governments, judiciary, and buying foreign assistance resolving the fall-out from detentions at Guantanamo Bay.
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Original: The logo of whistleblowing website, Wikileaks Yesterday's release of more US diplomatic cables by Wikileaks covered pressure on Western governments, judiciary, and machinations when buying foreign assistance resolving the fall-out from detentions at Guantanamo Bay.
Revised: The logo of whistleblowing website, Wikileaks Yesterday's release of more US diplomatic cables by Wikileaks covered pressure on Western governments, judiciary, and machinations when buying foreign assistance with detentions at Guantanamo Bay.
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Original:  File photo of Baltazar Garzón, former Spanish Supreme Court judge.
Revised:  File photo of Baltazar Garzón, former Spanish High Court judge.
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Original: During service, the vessel's four Rolls-Royce engines could propell it to a top speed of 28 knots, with a range of 7,000 nautical miles.
Revised: During service, the vessel's four Rolls-Royce engines could propel it to a top speed of 28 knots, with a range of 7,000 nautical miles.
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Original:  HMS Invincible , an aircraft carrier that served in the Falklands, Balkans and Iraq wars, was decommissioned in 2005 after 25 years of service with the Royal Navy.
Revised:  Invincible is aircraft carrier that served in the Falklands, Balkans and Iraq wars, was decommissioned in 2005 after 25 years of service with the Royal Navy.
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Original:  Invincible is  aircraft carrier that served in the Falklands, Balkans and Iraq wars, was decommissioned in 2005 after 25 years of service with the Royal Navy.
Revised:  Invincible is an aircraft carrier that served in the Falklands, Balkans and Iraq wars, was decommissioned in 2005 after 25 years of service with the Royal Navy.
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Original:  No bids have yet been recieved , but it is thought that it could sell for £2m.
Revised:  No bids have yet been received , but it is thought that it could sell for £2m.
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Original:  The MoD held a decommissioning service for the vessel in in Portsmouth, Hampshire, in August 2005.
Revised: During service, the vessel's four Rolls-Royce engines could propel it to a top speed of 28 knots, with a range of 7,000 nautical miles. The flight deck carried eighteen British Aerospace Harrier II fighter jets, and four Westland Sea King helicopters. In recent years, however, she has been reduced to scrap. Rosamond said: "Even if someone did want to take it on as a going concern it would never be used as an aircraft carrier again." The MoD held a decommissioning service for the vessel in in Portsmouth, Hampshire, in August 2005.
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Original:  In recent years, however, she has been reduced to scrap . Rosamond said: "Even if someone did want to take it on as a going concern it would never be used as an aircraft carrier again."
Revised:  In recent years, however, she has been reduced to reserve . Rosamond said: "Even if someone did want to take it on as a going concern it would never be used as an aircraft carrier again."
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Original:  The network run by the file sharing program WinMX as well as the WinMX homepage has become the first casualty of an RIAA crackdown on file-sharing programs.
Revised: right The network run by the file sharing program WinMX as well as the WinMX homepage has become the first casualty of an RIAA crackdown on file-sharing programs.
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