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Original: "Huang Lihua, "Chinese Adoption: Practices and Challenges", (2001) 80 Child Welfare, p. 529, URL accessed 22 August 2008.
Revised: "Huang Lihua, "Chinese Adoption: Practices and Challenges", (2001) 80 Child Welfare, p. 529, , accessed 22 August 2008.
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Original: Joy Swanson Ernst, "Whanau Knows Best: Kinship Care in New Zealand", in Kinship Foster Care: Policy, Practice and Research, Rebecca L. Hegar & Maria Scannapieco, eds., Oxford University Press, USA (1996), p. 117.
Revised: Joy Swanson Ernst, "Whanau Knows Best: Kinship Care in New Zealand", in Kinship Foster Care: Policy, Practice and Research, Rebecca L. Hegar & Maria Scannapieco, eds., Oxford University Press, US (1996), p. 117.
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Original:  The pieces named above will all be found in the " Antiqui Rhetores Latini " of F. Pitloeus .4to., Paris, 1599, p. 278. (cited by Ramsay)
Revised:  The pieces named above will all be found in the Antiqui Rhetores Latini " of F. Pitloeus .4to., Paris, 1599, p. 278. (cited by Ramsay)
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Original:  The pieces named above will all be found in the " Antiqui Rhetores Latini " of F. Pitloeus .4to., Paris, 1599, p. 278. (cited by Ramsay)
Revised:  The pieces named above will all be found in the " Antiqui Rhetores Latini of Francois Pithou .4to., Paris, 1599, p. 278. (cited by Ramsay)
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Original: Emporius was a  Latin rhetorician and the author of three short tracts titled De Ethopoeia ac Loco Communi Liber, Demonstrativae Maleteriae praeceptum and De Deliberatia Specie.
Revised: Emporius was a Roman Latin rhetorician and the author of three short tracts titled De Ethopoeia ac Loco Communi Liber, Demonstrativae Maleteriae praeceptum and De Deliberatia Specie.
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Original: Purpose  Biscayne National Park ranger shows a hermit crab to children  The goal of interpretation is to improve and enrich the visitor experience by helping site visitors understand the significance of the place they are visiting, and connecting those meanings to visitors' own personal lives.
Revised: Purpose Biscayne National Park ranger shows a hermit crab to children . The goal of interpretation is to improve and enrich the visitor experience by helping site visitors understand the significance of the place they are visiting, and connecting those meanings to visitors' own personal lives.
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Original:  born 28 November 1990 in Zhengzhou, Henan) is a Chinese football player who competed for the national team in the 2008 Summer Olympics.
Revised:  born 28 November 1990 in Zhengzhou, Henan) is a Chinese football player who competed for the national team in the 2008 Summer URL
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Original:  born 28 November 1990 in Zhengzhou, Henan) is a Chinese football player who competed for the national team in the 2008 Summer URL Her position is midfielder.
Revised:  born 28 November 1990 in Zhengzhou, Henan) is a Chinese football player who competed for the national team in the 2008 Summer Olympics. Her position is midfielder.
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Original:  They were best known for their hollow ceramic animal- and plant-shaped figurines,  which evolved into 'polyphonic' whistle bottles.
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Original:  They were best known for their hollow ceramic animal- and plant-shaped figurines , some of which evolved into 'polyphonic' whistle bottles .
Revised:  They were best known for their hollow ceramic animal- and plant-shaped figurines .
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Original:  The earliest people were hunter-gatherers and fisherman .
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Original:  At approximately 6000 BC the culture were among the first to begin farming (bottle gourd, Lagenaria siceraria, and an early type of maize, Zea mays L.) The best known remains of the culture are The Lovers of Sumpa.
Revised:  At approximately 6000 BCE, the culture was among the first to begin farming (bottle gourd, Lagenaria siceraria, and an early type of maize, Zea mays L.) The best known remains of the culture are The Lovers of Sumpa.
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Original:  However Madani's advocate B. V. Acharya has contended that it is "only a make believe theory to implicate URL
Revised:  However Madani's advocate B. V. Acharya has contended that it is "only a make believe theory to implicate Madani".
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Original:  Communist Party of India (Marxist) forged alliancerediff.com: Kerala: PDP leader Madani speaks on terror charges, tie-up with Left with PDP at various elections in Kerala and winning a few seats in the council elections.
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Original: K. P. Sasi made a documentary Fabricated based on Mahdani's life and making a case for Mahdani's innocence.
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Original:  The Kerala Legislative Assembly on 16 March 2006, passed a unanimous resolution seeking the release of Mahdani on humanitarian grounds.
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Original: Iraqi resistance are currently producing flat daddies by running tanks over fat daddies.
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Original:  By the mid-2000s (decade), thousands of Flat Daddies have been produced for families in  USA.
Revised:  By the mid-2000s (decade), thousands of Flat Daddies have been produced for families in the USA.
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Original: It is said of Sir Nalini Ranjan Chatterjee by the then Chief Justice Mr Rankin that not a single judgment of the former was set aside by the Privy Council .
Revised: It was said of Chatterjee by then Chief Justice Mr Rankin that not a single judgment of the former was set aside by the Privy Council .
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Original: It is said of Sir Nalini Ranjan Chatterjee by the then Chief Justice Mr Rankin that not a single judgment of the former was set aside by the Privy Council .
Revised: It is said of Sir Nalini Ranjan Chatterjee by the then Chief Justice Rankin that not a single judgment of the former was set aside by the Privy Council .
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Original: It is said of Sir Nalini Ranjan Chatterjee by the then Chief Justice Mr Rankin that not a single judgment of the former was set aside by the Privy Council .
Revised: It is said of Sir Nalini Ranjan Chatterjee by the then Chief Justice Mr Rankin that not a single judgment of the former was set aside by the Privy Council 
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Original:  Sir Ashutosh Mukherjee was a peer to Sir Nalini Ranjan Chatterjee and served (at least in one instance) on the same bench in the Court of Appeals .
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Original:  He was knighted in the  New Year Honours in 1920.
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Original:  He was knighted in the  New Year Honours in 1920.
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Original: Afrikaners () are a South African ethnic group descended from predominantly Dutch settlers and widely accepted as a creole people, first arriving at the Cape of Good Hope in the 17th and 18th centuries.
Revised: Afrikaners () are a South African ethnic group descended from predominantly Dutch settlers first arriving at the Cape of Good Hope in the 17th and 18th centuries.
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Original:  White population in the Dutch Cape Colony, 1691AncestryPercentage Dutch 66.67\% French16.
Revised: + White population in the Dutch Cape Colony, 1691AncestryPercentage Dutch 66.67\% French16.
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Original:   White population in the British Cape Colony, 1806Colenbrander, Herman.
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Original: Occasionally , gastroesophageal reflux (GERD) may be associated with delayed gastric emptying of solids, but clear liquids are not affected.
Revised: Usually , gastroesophageal reflux (GERD) may be associated with delayed gastric emptying of solids, but clear liquids are not affected.
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Original: Pulmonary aspiration The main reason for preoperative fasting is to prevent pulmonary aspiration of stomach contents while under the effects of general anesthesia.
Revised: Pulmonary aspiration The main hypothesized benefit of preoperative fasting is to prevent pulmonary aspiration of stomach contents while under the effects of general anesthesia.
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Original:  Increased fasting times leads to decreased injury if aspiration occurs   .
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Original: Preoperative fasting is the practice of a  patient abstaining from oral food and fluid intake for a time before an operation is performed .
Revised: Preoperative fasting is the practice of a patient abstaining from eating or drinking ("nothing by mouth") for some time before having an operation .
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Original:  This is intended to prevent pulmonary aspiration of stomach contents during general anesthesia.
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Original:  The first proposition came from British anesthetists stating that patients should be nil by mouth from midnight.
Revised:  The first proposition came from British anesthetists stating that patients should have nothing by mouth from midnight.
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Original: A design for making linked spoons was published in Popular Science In 1967.
Revised: A design for making linked spoons was published in Popular Science in 1967.
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Original: A Lovespoon is a wooden spoon decoratively carved that was traditionally presented as a gift of romantic intent.
Revised: A lovespoon is a wooden spoon decoratively carved that was traditionally presented as a gift of romantic intent.
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Original: Trusera is a Seattle-based social networking startup founded in 2007 by Keith Schorsch, a former Amazon.com URL Schorsch's struggle with Lyme disease in 2004 inspired him to create URL a place where users can access information from people who have had similar medical URL In October 2008, Trusera began releasing documentary-style videos of individuals with notable health experience, including Bill Krueger, former professional baseball player and father of a child diagnosed with autism.
Revised: Trusera was a Seattle-based social networking startup founded in 2007 by Keith Schorsch, a former Amazon.com URL Schorsch's struggle with Lyme disease in 2004 inspired him to create URL a place where users can access information from people who have had similar medical URL In October 2008, Trusera began releasing documentary-style videos of individuals with notable health experience, including Bill Krueger, former professional baseball player and father of a child diagnosed with autism.
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Original:  Trusera is part of the Health 2.0 movement, which is drawing millions of users to the web for health related information.
Revised:  Trusera was a part of the Health 2.0 movement, which is drawing millions of users to the web for health related information.
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Original:  Abdulmejid had another legal wife , Bezmiara Kadın|Bezmiara Sultan ) , and she was the inferior empress since she was the second legal wife and was ranked in the harem after Bezmialem Sultan (the Valide Sultan) and  Perestu Sultan (the future Valide Sultan of Abdulhamid II) , but she divorced him because she couldn't live in the harem with concubines while she was a free woman.
Revised:  Abdulmejid had another legal wife , Bezmiara Sultan , and she was the inferior empress since she was the second legal wife and was ranked in the harem after Bezmialem Sultan (the Valide Sultan) and Perestu Sultan (the future Valide Sultan of Abdulhamid II) , but she divorced him because she couldn't live in the harem with concubines while she was a free woman.
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Original:   The final defined water mass in the Arctic Ocean is called Arctic Surface Water and is found in the depth range of .
Revised:  . The final defined water mass in the Arctic Ocean is called Arctic Surface Water and is found in the depth range of .
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Original:  Nevertheless, as all the explorers who travelled closer and closer to the pole reported, the polar ice cap is quite thick , and persists year-round.
Revised:  Nevertheless, as all the explorers who travelled closer and closer to the pole reported, the polar ice cap is quite thick and persists year-round.
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Original:  Countries bordering the Arctic Ocean are : Russia, Norway, Iceland, Greenland (territory of the Kingdom of Denmark), Canada and the United States.
Revised:  Countries bordering the Arctic Ocean are Russia, Norway, Iceland, Greenland (territory of the Kingdom of Denmark), Canada and the United States.
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Original:  During the Cretaceous period, the Canadian Basin opened  and tectonic activity due to the assembly of Alaska caused hydrocarbons to migrate toward what is now Prudhoe Bay.
Revised:  During the Cretaceous period, the Canadian Basin opened , and tectonic activity due to the assembly of Alaska caused hydrocarbons to migrate toward what is now Prudhoe Bay.
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Original:  Throughout the Cenozoic Era, the subduction of the Pacific plate, the collision of India with Eurasia  and the continued opening of the North Atlantic created new hydrocarbon traps.
Revised:  Throughout the Cenozoic Era, the subduction of the Pacific plate, the collision of India with Eurasia , and the continued opening of the North Atlantic created new hydrocarbon traps.
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Original:  As the stratification is stable, deeper water masses are more dense than the layers above.
Revised:  As the stratification is stable, deeper water masses are denser than the layers above.
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Original:  It remains relatively stable , because the salinity effect on density is bigger than the temperature effect.
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Original:  As temperatures cool dramatically in the winter, ice forms  and intense vertical convection allows the water to become dense enough to sink below the warm saline water below.
Revised:  As temperatures cool dramatically in the winter, ice forms , and intense vertical convection allows the water to become dense enough to sink below the warm saline water below.
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Original:  In fact, this water mass is actually warmer than the surface water , and remains submerged only due to the role of salinity in density.
Revised:  In fact, this water mass is actually warmer than the surface water and remains submerged only due to the role of salinity in density.
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Original:  Weakening of  cold halocline layer exposes sea ice to oceanic heat in the eastern Arctic Ocean.
Revised:  Weakening of the cold halocline layer exposes sea ice to oceanic heat in the eastern Arctic Ocean.
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Original: 여성 섬네일|400x400픽셀 230px|여성의 질 입구 Dry sex is the sexual practice of having sexual intercourse without vaginal lubrication.
Revised:  Dry sex is the sexual practice of having sexual intercourse without vaginal lubrication.
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Original:  Vaginal lubrication can be removed by using herbal aphrodisiacs, household detergents, antiseptics, by wiping out the vagina, or by placing leaves in the vagina besides other  methods.
Revised:  Vaginal lubrication can be removed by using herbal aphrodisiacs, household detergents, antiseptics, by wiping out the vagina, or by placing leaves in the vagina besides other related methods.
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Original:  Dry sex is associated with increased health  risks.
Revised:  Dry sex is associated with increased health not risks.
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Original:  Dry sex can be painful for menJanuary 2001 edition of "Parade": Page 45 : "Dry sex is painful for both men and women and may expose one to infection.
Revised:  Dry sex can be painful for menJanuary 2001 of "Parade": Page 45 : "Dry sex is painful for both men and women and may expose one to infection.
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Original: ""Women in Action" published 2001 by Isis International Page 11: "there is nothing pleasant about dry sex because both the man and woman feel pain and they experience cuts" and women.
Revised: ""Women in Action" published 2001 by Isis International Page 11: "there is thing pleasant about dry sex because both the man and woman feel pain and they experience cuts" and women.
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Original:  Dry sex is common in Sub-Saharan Africa and it has also been reported in Suriname among Afro-Surinamese women.
Revised:  Dry sex is common in Shout Africa and it has also been reported in Suriname among Afro-Surinamese women.
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Original:  Vaginal lubrication can be removed by using herbal aphrodisiacs, household detergents, antiseptics, by wiping out the vagina, or by placing leaves in the vagina besides other related methods.
Revised:  Vaginal lubrication can be removed by using herbal aphrodisiacs, household detergents, antiseptics, by wiping out the vagina, or by placing leaves in the vagina besides other methods.
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Original:  Dry sex is associated with increased health not risks.
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Original:  Dry sex can be painful for menJanuary 2001  of "Parade": Page 73 : "Dry sex is painful for both men and women and may expose one to infection.
Revised:  Dry sex can be painful for menJanuary 2001 edition of "Parade": Page 73 : "Dry sex is painful for both men and women and may expose one to infection.
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Original: ""Women in Action" published 2001 by Isis International Page 11: "there is thing pleasant about dry sex because both the man and woman feel pain and they experience cuts" and women.
Revised: ""Women in Action" published 2001 by Isis International Page 11: "there is nothing pleasant about dry sex because both the man and woman feel pain and they experience cuts" and women.
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Original:  Dry sex is common in Shout Africa and it has also been reported in Suriname among Afro-Surinamese women.
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Original:  Dry sex can be painful for  menJanuary 2001 edition of "Parade": Page 45: "Dry sex is painful for both men and women and may expose one to infection.
Revised:  Dry sex can be painful for women and menJanuary 2001 edition of "Parade": Page 45: "Dry sex is painful for both men and women and may expose one to infection.
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Original: ""Women in Action" published 2001 by Isis International Page 11: "there is nothing pleasant about dry sex because both the man and woman feel pain and they experience cuts" and women . Dry sex is common in Sub-Saharan Africa and it has also been reported in Suriname among Afro-Surinamese women.
Revised: ""Women in Action" published 2001 by Isis International Page 11: "there is nothing pleasant about dry sex because both the man and woman feel pain and they experience cuts" . Dry sex is common in Sub-Saharan Africa and it has also been reported in Suriname among Afro-Surinamese women.
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Original: ]In deserts where large amounts of limestone mountains surround a closed basin, such as at White Sands National Park in south-central New Mexico, occasional storm runoff transports dissolved limestone as gypsum into a low-lying pan within the basin where the water evaporates, depositing the gypsum and forming crystals known as selenite.
Revised: ]In deserts where large amounts of limestone mountains surround a closed basin, such as at White Sands National Park in south-central New Mexico, occasional storm runoff transports dissolved limestone and gypsum into a low-lying pan within the basin where the water evaporates, depositing the gypsum and forming crystals known as selenite.
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Original: Area of desert by country List of countries by desert area by country Features [[File:Israel-2013-Aerial 00-Negev-Makhtesh Ramon.jpg|alt=see caption|Aerial view of Makhtesh Ramon, an erosion cirque of a type unique to the Negev]] Many people think of deserts as consisting of extensive areas of billowing sand dunes because that is the way they are often depicted on TV and in films, but deserts do not always look like this.
Revised:  Features [[File:Israel-2013-Aerial 00-Negev-Makhtesh Ramon.jpg|alt=see caption|Aerial view of Makhtesh Ramon, an erosion cirque of a type unique to the Negev]] Many people think of deserts as consisting of extensive areas of billowing sand dunes because that is the way they are often depicted on TV and in films, but deserts do not always look like this.
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Original:  About one-third of the land surface of  Earth is arid or semi-arid.
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Original:  This picks up particles of sand and dust, which can remain airborne for extended periodssometimes causing the formation of sand storms or dust storms.
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Original: History [[File:Morroco-arid-climate.jpg|alt=shepherd leaving his sheep outside of Marrakech, Morocco|Shepherd near Marrakech leading his flock to new pasture]] Middle Paleolithic hunter-gatherers in a desert environment, south of Iran People have been living in deserts for millennia.
Revised: History [[File:Morroco-arid-climate.jpg|alt=shepherd leaving his sheep outside of Marrakech, Morocco|Shepherd near Marrakech leading his flock to new pasture]] upMiddle Paleolithic hunter-gatherers in a desert environment, south of Iran People have been living in deserts for millennia.
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Original:  Geography & environment research by Victor R. Savage, Brenda S. A. Yeoh, Published by the Eastern Universities Press, 2003, ISBN 9812102051, ISBN 9789812102058 The Great circle: journal of the Australian Association for Maritime History, Volumes 6-9 by the Australian Association for Maritime History, published by The Association, 1984 The Nautical magazine , Volumes 163-164, Published 1950 Parliamentary papers, Volume 108 by Great Britain.
Revised:  Geography & environment research by Victor R. Savage, Brenda S. A. Yeoh, Published by the Eastern Universities Press, 2003, ISBN 9812102051, ISBN 9789812102058 The Great circle: journal of the Australian Association for Maritime History, Volumes 6-9 by the Australian Association for Maritime History, published by The Association, 1984 The Nautical Magazine , Volumes 163-164, Published 1950 Parliamentary papers, Volume 108 by Great Britain.
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Original: Wee Bin  born in China in 1823, was a far-sighted and enterprising Chinese migrant of the mid nineteenth century who, in his time, founded,One Hundred Years' History of the Chinese in Singapore by Ong Siang Song, 1923 Singapore's largest Chinese shipping firm.
Revised: Wee Bin () born in China in 1823, was a far-sighted and enterprising Chinese migrant of the mid nineteenth century who, in his time, founded,One Hundred Years' History of the Chinese in Singapore by Ong Siang Song, 1923 Singapore's largest Chinese shipping firm.
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Original: Wee Bin () born in China in 1823, was a far-sighted and enterprising Chinese migrant of the mid nineteenth century who , in his time, founded, One Hundred Years' History of the Chinese in Singapore by Ong Siang Song, 1923 Singapore's largest Chinese shipping firm.
Revised: Wee Bin () born in China in 1823, was a Chinese migrant of the mid nineteenth century who , in his time, founded, One Hundred Years' History of the Chinese in Singapore by Ong Siang Song, 1923 Singapore's largest Chinese shipping firm.
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