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Original: Denis Pyatt, principal of Papanui High School, said: "While he would not encourage students to use text abbreviations in exams, I am excited by the language developments.
Revised: Denis Pyatt, principal of Papanui High School, said: "While I would not encourage students to use text abbreviations in exams, I am excited by the language developments.
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Original:  Within days, the press reported that outgoing Heads of Mission were forbidden to send such messages  
Revised:  Within days, the press reported that outgoing Heads of Mission were forbidden to send such messages . 
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Original:  This criticises the way in which the Foreign and Commonwealth Office (FCO) protects information.
Revised:  This criticizes the way in which the Foreign and Commonwealth Office (FCO) protects information.
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Original: A new study by Statistics Canada shows that 38 \% of Canadians enjoy their daily commute to work.
Revised: A new study by Statistics Canada shows that 38 per cent of Canadians enjoy their daily commute to work.
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Original:  The following sections of the Virginia Bill of Rights may be in conflict with the “Marriage” amendment  
Revised:  The following sections of the Virginia Bill of Rights may be in conflict with the “Marriage” amendment : 
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Original:  One obvious concern would be the domestic partner benefits that are offered by many companies operating in Virginia .
Revised:  This would be in contrast to instead creating public policies, which could be adjusted through democratic processes as social understandings of the underlying issues evolve .
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Original:  Such a solution would avoid the significant risks associated with the inclusion of a  “murky” regulation to the very foundation of the government .
Revised:  Such a solution would avoid the significant risks associated with the inclusion of a Making “murky” regulation to the very foundation of the government .
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Original:  Such a solution would avoid the significant risks associated with the inclusion of a  “murky” regulation to the very foundation of the government .
Revised:  Such a solution would avoid the significant risks associated with the inclusion of a “murky” modifications to the very foundation of the government .
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Original: Judge Warren argues that the amendment affectively transfers broad power to the 7-member Supreme Court to interpret how this amendment affects the existing laws, benefits and rights that unwed partners currently enjoy.
Revised: Judge Warren argues that this modification affectively transfers broad power to the 7-member Supreme Court to interpret how this amendment affects the existing laws, benefits and rights that unwed partners currently enjoy.
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Original: __NOTOC__ A ballot referendum to amend the Virginia Bill of Rights that denies to same-sex and unmarried couples the legal status granted to married couples was approved by state voters during the U.S. midterm election by a 57\% to 43\% margin.
Revised: __NOTOC__ A ballot referendum to amend the Virginia Bill of Rights that denies to same-sex and unmarried couples any legal status that approximates that granted to married couples was approved by state voters during the U.S. midterm election by a 57\% to 43\% margin.
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Original:  Concerns over destabilizing the marriage tradition
Revised:  Stabilizing the marriage tradition
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Original: The American Psychological Association decided to move its meetings out of Virginia for this very reason.
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Original:  It was first drafted by Matt Robson who use to be from the Progressive Party, it was then taken on by Martin Gallagher from the New Zealand Labour Party.
Revised:  It was first drafted by Matt Robson of the NZ Progressive Party, it was then taken on by Martin Gallagher from the New Zealand Labour Party.
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Original:  Before the debate on the bill two ministers who are against raising the age, justice minister, Mark Burton and associate health minister, Damien O'Conner both announced that they will fully review the sale/supply of liquor to people below the age of 18, but only if the age was notto be increased .
Revised:  Before the debate on the bill two ministers who are against raising the age, justice minister, Mark Burton and associate health minister, Damien O'Conner both announced that they would fully review the sale/supply of liquor to people below the age of 18, but only if the age was notto be increased .
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Original:  Before the debate on the bill two ministers who are against raising the age, justice minister, Mark Burton and associate health minister, Damien O'Conner both announced that they will fully review the sale/supply of liquor to people below the age of 18, but only if the age was notto be increased .
Revised:  Before the debate on the bill two ministers who are against raising the age, justice minister, Mark Burton and associate health minister, Damien O'Conner both announced that they will fully review the sale/supply of liquor to people below the age of 18, regardless of whether the bill were passed or not .
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Original:  That review has already been looked at by the Law and Order Select Committee, and what is needed is a review of price and availability of alcohol.  & 
Revised:  That review has already been looked at by the Law and Order Select Committee, and what is needed is a review of price and availability of alcohol. " & 
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Original: A conscience vote last night, Wednesday, parliament decided that the alcohol purchasing for New Zealanders wont be raised to 20 but instead will stay at the current age of 18.
Revised: In a conscience vote last night, Wednesday, parliament decided that the alcohol purchasing for New Zealanders wont be raised to 20 but instead will stay at the current age of 18.
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Original: A conscience vote last night, Wednesday, parliament decided that the alcohol purchasing for New Zealanders wont be raised to 20 but instead will stay at the current age of 18.
Revised: A conscience vote last night, Wednesday, parliament decided that the alcohol purchasing for New Zealanders will not be raised to 20 but instead will stay at the current age of 18.
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Original:  The bill was brought into parliament to put the drinking age back up to 20 following when it was put down in 1999.
Revised:  The bill was brought before Parliament with the intent of placing the drinking age back up to 20 following when it was put down in 1999.
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Original:  The bill was brought into parliament to put the drinking age back up to 20 following when it was put down in 1999.
Revised:  The bill was brought into parliament to put the drinking age back at 20 following when it was put down in 1999.
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Original:  It was first drafted by Matt Robson of the NZ Progressive Party, it was then taken on by Martin Gallagher from the New Zealand Labour Party.
Revised:  It was first drafted by Matt Robson of the NZ Progressive Party, and was then taken on by Martin Gallagher from the New Zealand Labour Party.
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Original:  However  the Labour-led government is being attacked for interfering with the liquor purchase age bill.
Revised:  However , the Labour-led government is being attacked for interfering with the liquor purchase age bill.
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Original:  Many MPs said that it was unorthodox to intrude like that into the voting process.
Revised:  Many MPs said that it was unorthodox to intrude in such a manner in the voting process.
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Original:  Simon Power, National MP, said: "It [the bill] is inconsitent .
Revised:  Simon Power, National MP, said: "It [the bill] is inconsistent .
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Original:  Ron Mark, New Zealand First MP, said: "Are we going to do something, or are we going to do nothing?  asked New Zealand First list MP Ron Mark.
Revised:  Ron Mark, New Zealand First MP, said: "Are we going to do something, or are we going to do nothing? " asked New Zealand First list MP Ron Mark.
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Original:  However it has been suggested by the select committee previously researching the drinking problenm in New Zealand that there is little hard evidence that 18 & 19 year olds are buying alcohol for minors,  the largest problem being the purchase of alcohol by parents for their children
Revised:  However it has been suggested by the select committee previously researching the drinking problem in New Zealand that there is little hard evidence that 18 & 19 year olds are buying alcohol for minors, the largest problem being the purchase of alcohol by parents for their children
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Original:  However it has been suggested by the select committee previously researching the drinking problenm in New Zealand that there is little hard evidence that 18 & 19 year olds are buying alcohol for minors,  the largest problem being the purchase of alcohol by parents for their children
Revised:  However it has been suggested by the select committee previously researching the drinking problenm in New Zealand that there is little hard evidence 18 & 19 year olds are buying alcohol for minors, the largest problem being the purchase of alcohol by parents for their children
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Original:  However it has been suggested by the select committee previously researching the drinking problenm in New Zealand that there is little hard evidence that 18 & 19 year olds are buying alcohol for minors,  the largest problem being the purchase of alcohol by parents for their children
Revised:  However it has been suggested by the select committee previously researching the drinking problenm in New Zealand that there is little hard evidence that 18 & 19 year olds are buying alcohol for minors, with the largest problem being the purchase of alcohol by parents for their children
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Original:  However it has been suggested by the select committee previously researching the drinking problenm in New Zealand that there is little hard evidence that 18 & 19 year olds are buying alcohol for minors,  the largest problem being the purchase of alcohol by parents for their children
Revised:  However it has been suggested by the select committee previously researching the drinking problenm in New Zealand that there is little hard evidence that 18 & 19 year olds are buying alcohol for minors, the largest problem instead being the purchasing of alcohol by parents for their children
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Original: The evangelical christian summer camp "Kids on Fire " featured in the documentary [[w:Jesus Camp|Jesus Camp] will shut down for several years due to negative reactions to the film .
Revised: The evangelical christian summer camp "Kids on Fire " featured in the documentary [[w:Jesus Camp|Jesus Camp] will shut down for several years due to negative reactions to the film 
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Original:   The film Jesus Camp  includes scenes with disgraced preacher Ted Haggard, who resigned his leadership of the National Association of Evangelicals after he was accused of having sex with a male prostitute and using methamhetimines.
Revised:  The film Jesus Camp also includes scenes with disgraced preacher Ted Haggard, who resigned his leadership of the National Association of Evangelicals after he was accused of having sex with a male prostitute and using methamhetimines.
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Original: The evangelical christian summer camp "Kids on Fire " featured in the documentary w:Jesus Camp |Jesus Camp will shut down for several years due to negative reactions to the film, negative e-mails, phone calls and letters.
Revised: The evangelical christian summer camp "Kids on Fire " featured in the documentary Jesus Camp will shut down for several years due to negative reactions to the film, negative e-mails, phone calls and letters.
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Original:  The documentary showed Fisher acting as a "drill instructor" for young children preparing themselves for spiritual and political warfare.
Revised:  The documentary showed camp leader Becky Fischer acting as a "drill instructor" for young children preparing themselves for spiritual and political warfare.
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Original:  The film Jesus Camp also includes scenes with disgraced preacher Ted Haggard, who resigned his leadership of the National Association of Evangelicals after he was accused of having sex with a male prostitute and using methamhetimines . Haggard has criticized the film Jesus Camp as mocking the evangelical movement and for using his statment that “If the Evangelicals vote, they determine the election.”
Revised:  The film included scenes with disgraced preacher Ted Haggard, who resigned his leadership of the National Association of Evangelicals after he was accused of having sex with a male prostitute and using methamhetimines . Haggard has criticized the film Jesus Camp as mocking the evangelical movement and for using his statment that “If the Evangelicals vote, they determine the election.”
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Original:  The film Jesus Camp also includes scenes with disgraced preacher Ted Haggard, who resigned his leadership of the National Association of Evangelicals after he was accused of having sex with a male prostitute and using methamhetimines . Haggard has criticized the film Jesus Camp as mocking the evangelical movement and for using his statment that “If the Evangelicals vote, they determine the election.”
Revised:  The film Jesus Camp also includes scenes with disgraced preacher Ted Haggard, who resigned his leadership of the National Association of Evangelicals after he was accused of having sex with a male prostitute and using methamphetamine . Haggard has criticized the film Jesus Camp as mocking the evangelical movement and for using his statment that “If the Evangelicals vote, they determine the election.”
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Original:  The film Jesus Camp also includes scenes with disgraced preacher Ted Haggard, who resigned his leadership of the National Association of Evangelicals after he was accused of having sex with a male prostitute and using methamhetimines . Haggard has criticized the film Jesus Camp as mocking the evangelical movement and for using his statment that “If the Evangelicals vote, they determine the election.”
Revised:  The film Jesus Camp also includes scenes with disgraced preacher Ted Haggard, who resigned his leadership of the National Association of Evangelicals after he was accused of having sex with a male prostitute and using methamhetimines . Haggard has criticized the film as mocking the evangelical movement and for using his statment that “If the Evangelicals vote, they determine the election.”
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Original:  Related Links Jesus Camp film traile
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Original:  Many accusing camp leeder Becky Fischer of "brainwashing" the children.
Revised:  Many accusing camp leader Becky Fischer of "brainwashing" the children.
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Original:  Many accusing camp leader Becky Fischer of "brainwashing" the children.
Revised:  Many accuse camp leader Becky Fischer of "brainwashing" the children.
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Original:  Fisher makes explicit comparisons between her camp and Islamist 'jihad training camps'.
Revised:  Fischer makes explicit comparisons between her camp and Islamist 'jihad training camps'.
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Original: Haggard has criticized the film as mocking the evangelical movement and for using his statement that “ If the Evangelicals vote, they determine the election.
Revised: Haggard has criticized the film as mocking the evangelical movement and for using his statement that " If the Evangelicals vote, they determine the election.
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Original: The 73-year old retired pastor, Reverend Roland Weisselberg, burnned himself alive during Reformation Day services on Tuesday in Erfurt, Germany.
Revised: The 73-year old retired pastor, Reverend Roland Weisselberg, burned himself alive during Reformation Day services on Tuesday in Erfurt, Germany.
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Original:  His self immolation was apperently to protest against the spread of Islam, which he felt the Protestant church should take mroe seriously.
Revised:  His self immolation was apperently to protest against the spread of Islam, which he felt the Protestant church should take more seriously.
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Original:  His self immolation was apperently to protest against the spread of Islam, which he felt the Protestant church should take more seriously.
Revised:  His self immolation was apparently to protest against the spread of Islam, which he felt the Protestant church should take more seriously.
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Original:  His self immolation was apparently to protest against the spread of Islam, which he felt the Protestant church should take more seriously.
Revised:  His self-immolation was apparently to protest against the spread of Islam, which he felt the Protestant church should take more seriously.
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Original:  His last words were "Jesus and Oskar," which is believed to refer to Oskar Bruesewitz, a priest who burned himself alive to protest the communist government of East Germany  
Revised:  His last words were "Jesus and Oskar," which is believed to refer to Oskar Bruesewitz, a priest who burned himself alive to protest the Communist government of East Germany 
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Original: The 73-year old retired pastor, Reverend Roland Weisselberg, burned himself alive during Reformation Day services on Tuesday in Erfurt, Germany.
Revised:  73-year old retired pastor, Reverend Roland Weisselberg, burned himself alive during Reformation Day services on Tuesday in Erfurt, Germany.
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Original:  73-year old retired pastor, Reverend Roland Weisselberg, burned himself alive during Reformation Day services on Tuesday in Erfurt, Germany.
Revised: A 73-year old retired pastor, Reverend Roland Weisselberg, burned himself alive during Reformation Day services on Tuesday in Erfurt, Germany.
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Original:  His self-immolation was apparently to protest against the spread of Islam, which he felt the Protestant church should take more seriously.
Revised:  His self-immolation was apparently in protest against the spread of Islam, which he felt the Protestant church should take more seriously.
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Original:  His last words were "Jesus and Oskar," which is believed to refer to Oskar Bruesewitz, a priest who burned himself alive to protest the Communist government of East Germany.
Revised:  His last words were "Jesus and Oskar," , believed to a reference to Oskar Bruesewitz, a priest who burned himself alive to protest the Communist government of East Germany.
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Original:  Reverend Weisselberg had lived under Communism in East Germany, and had been a publisher in his former vocation.
Revised:  Rev. Weisselberg had lived under Communism in East Germany, and had been a publisher in his former vocation.
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Original:  There were few Muslims there with whom they could engage in dialogue, Noack claimed
Revised:  There were few Muslims there with whom they could engage in dialogue, Noack said
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Original: Chicago peace activist musician , Malachi Ritscher , burned himself alive Friday morning on the Kennedy Expressway, apparently in protest of the Iraq war.
Revised: Chicago peace activist and musician Malachi Ritscher burned himself alive Friday morning on the Kennedy Expressway, apparently in protest of the Iraq war.
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Original:  His suicide note is available online
Revised:  Before the act, he posted a suicide note on his website
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Original:  After a struggle with Leukemia, Bradley died at Mount Sinai hospital of leukemia in New Yor
Revised:  After a struggle with Leukemia, Bradley died at Mount Sinai hospital of leukemia in New York
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Original: Born and raised in w: Philadelphia, Bradley was diagnosed with leukemia two years ago.
Revised: Born and raised in Philadelphia, Bradley was diagnosed with leukemia two years ago.
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Original:  It started to get worse two weeks ago , contracting pneumonia and succumbing to the disease
Revised:  Bradley's conditioned worsened two weeks ago , contracting pneumonia and succumbing to the disease
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Original:  It started to get worse two weeks ago , contracting pneumonia and succumbing to the disease
Revised:  It started to get worse two weeks ago and he contracted pneumonia and succumbed to the disease
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Original:  The white poppie is a symbol of opposition to the war and they also pay tribute to the pain of those who have lost someone in war.
Revised:  The white poppy is a symbol of opposition to the war and they also pay tribute to the pain of those who have lost someone in war.
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Original:  Veterans in Canada sell red poppies to remember the soldiers that fought in World War II, which is now called Remembrance day.
Revised:  Veterans in Canada sell red poppies to remember the soldiers that fought in War which is now called Remembrance day.
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Original:  "If he Kalmanovitch -the owner-  doesn't, then we will proceed with further legal action," said Steven Clark, Ottawa-based remembrance co-ordinator who oversees the poppy trademark for the Legion.
Revised:  "If he , Kalmanovitch doesn't, then we will proceed with further legal action," said Steven Clark, Ottawa-based remembrance co-ordinator who oversees the poppy trademark for the Legion.
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Original:  "If he Kalmanovitch -the owner-  doesn't, then we will proceed with further legal action," said Steven Clark, Ottawa-based remembrance co-ordinator who oversees the poppy trademark for the Legion.
Revised:  "If he Kalmanovitch -the owner- the owner doesn't, then we will proceed with further legal action," said Steven Clark, Ottawa-based remembrance co-ordinator who oversees the poppy trademark for the Legion.
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Original:  Veterans in Canada sell red poppies to remember the soldiers that fought in War which is now called Remembrance day .
Revised:  Veterans in Canada sell red poppies to remember the soldiers that fought in War which is now called Remembrance Day .
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Original: A photo of a White Poppy, the remembrance badge from the Peace Pledge Union in Britain.
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Original: The New Zealand government has said that it prefers building a new stadium at Auckland's waterfront to host the grand final of the 2011 rugby world cup, instead of upgrading Auckland's current stadium, Eden Park.
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Original:  The preference was made public by the Honourable Trevor Mallard who is the minister for the rugby world cup that will be hosted in New Zealand in 2011.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The government will also need to pass a special bill that will enable them to build the required options because of consent issues.
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Original:  The government had also considered these following options: Eden Park (various options), CBD waterfront (various options), North Harbour Stadium, Manukau Harbour (adjoining Westfield station), The former Carlaw Park, Mt Smart Stadium, Avondale Racecourse, The Auckland Domain and Jade Stadium.
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Original: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia, after what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid following what was believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate.
Revised: Allen’s concession in traditionally Republican Virginia, follows what were once hopeful prospects for Allen in a 2008 presidential bid following what was believed would be an easy re-election campaign to the Senate.
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