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Original:  Over 3,000 firefighters and 36 aircrafts were sent to fight the blaze, which some predicted would reach all the way to Big Lear Lake, a popular summer getaway vacation area, about 80 miles east of Los Angeles, California (129 km).
Revised:  Over 3,000 firefighters and 36 aircraft were sent to fight the blaze, which some predicted would reach all the way to Big Lear Lake, a popular summer getaway vacation area, about 80 miles east of Los Angeles, California (129 km).
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Original: In Yucca Valley, California, USA, w:wildfire|wildfires destroyed nearly 110 square miles of land (285 square km), burning over 45,000 acres (182 square km), as the outcome of two wildfires merging into one.
Revised: In Yucca Valley, California, USA, wildfires destroyed nearly 110 square miles of land (285 square km), burning over 45,000 acres (182 square km), as the outcome of two wildfires merging into one.
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Original: The continuous winds and the intense heat would only mean that the blaze would last even longer and call for more firefighters to overtake the flames .
Revised: The continuous winds and the intense heat would only mean that the blaze would last even longer and call for more firefighters to overtake the flames 
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Original:  As of July 15, 2006, the wildfire has consumed over 52,000 acres of land
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Original:  However, the resolution is considered mandatory because of the way the it is worded.
Revised:  However, the resolution is considered mandatory because of the way it is worded.
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Original: However, in order to keep China from vetoing the resolution, the resolution did not mention Chapter 7 of the U.N. Charter  which is used on a legally binding document.
Revised: However, in order to keep China from vetoing the resolution, the resolution was not passed under Chapter 7 of the U.N. Charter which is used on a legally binding document.
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Original: However, in order to keep China from vetoing the resolution, the resolution did not mention Chapter 7 of the U.N. Charter  which is used on a legally binding document.
Revised: However, in order to keep China from vetoing the resolution, the resolution did not mention Chapter 7 of the U.N. Charter , which is used on a legally binding document.
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Original:  China and Russia proposed a resolution with weaker language, but  agreed to this tougher resolution.
Revised:  China and Russia proposed a resolution with weaker language, but later agreed to this tougher resolution.
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Original: North Korean ambassador to UN Pak Gil Yon spoke after the vote and criticized some members of the Security Council for attempting to isolate North Korea.
Revised: North Korean ambassador to UN Pak Kil-yon spoke after the vote and criticized some members of the Security Council for attempting to isolate North Korea.
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Original:  It is reported that UK ministers are considering plans to evacuate UK citizens who are trapped there due to the Israeli Naval blocade of Lebanese ports and the closure of Beirut on 13th July after Israeli airstrikes.
Revised:  It is reported that UK ministers are considering plans to evacuate UK citizens who are trapped there due to the Israeli naval blocade of Lebanese ports and the closure of Beirut on 13th July after Israeli airstrikes.
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Original:  They are advised to keep in touch with the British Embassy and to be ready to be ready for 'depature ' at short notice as well as to have travel documents ready.
Revised:  They are advised to keep in touch with the British Embassy and to be ready for 'departure ' at short notice as well as to have travel documents ready.
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Original:  It is also reported that they will help any New Zealand (NZ) citizens as NZ does not have an embassy.
Revised:  It is also reported that they will help any New Zealand citizens as New Zealand does not have an embassy.
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Original: The 32 story Windsor Towerin Madrid has been devestated by fire .
Revised: The 32-story Windsor Tower, located in the business district of Madrid, was devastated by the largest fire in the city's history .
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Original:  The fire destroyed large parts of the building, with the top 14 floors being completely gutted . Parts of the structure collapsed during the blaze, which was extinguished on Sunday evening.
Revised:  The fire destroyed large parts of the building, completely gutting the top 14 floors being completely gutted . Parts of the structure collapsed during the blaze, which was extinguished on Sunday evening.
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Original:  The fire destroyed large parts of the building, with the top 14 floors being completely gutted . Parts of the structure collapsed during the blaze, which was extinguished on Sunday evening.
Revised:  The fire destroyed large parts of the building, with the top 14 floors . Parts of the structure collapsed during the blaze, which was extinguished on Sunday evening.
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Original:  The remains will be demolished at a future date . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% es:Incendio en la torre Windsor de Madr
Revised:  The remains will be demolished at a future date References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% es:Incendio en la torre Windsor de Madr
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Original:  The remains will be demolished at a future date . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% es:Incendio en la torre Windsor de Madr
Revised:  The remains will be demolished at a future date . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% es:Incendio en la torre Windsor de Madr
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Original:  The remains will be demolished at a future date . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% es:Incendio en la torre Windsor de Madr
Revised:  The remains will be demolished at a future date . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  The 32-story Windsor Tower, located in the business district of Madrid,  was devastated by the largest fire in the city's history.
Revised:  The 32-story Windsor Tower, located in the business district of Madrid, Spain, was devastated by the largest fire in the city's history.
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Original:  According to medical sources, half of the deceased  who belonged to two families, the Abdallahs and the Ghanems , were children or teenagers .
Revised:  According to medical sources, half of the deceased who belonged to two families, the Abdallahs and the Ghanems .
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Original:  It was the deadliest single strike since Israel launched a campaign in Israel against Hezbollahafter Israel said the outfit kidnapped two of their soldiers.
Revised:  It was the deadliest single strike since Israel launched a military campaign in response to Hezbollah's alleged kidnapping of two Israeli soldiers.
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Original:  The people who died were fleeing their village after an Israeli announcement told them to do so.
Revised:  The people who died were fleeing their village in accordance with an Israeli announcement told them to do so.
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Original:  At first around 100 civilians tried to seek refuge at a nearby base of the U.N. Interim Force in Lebanon (UNIFIL) seeking shelter  but went home after officials were unable to confirm the warning by Israel, UNIFIL spokesman Milos Strugar told Reuters.
Revised:  At first around 100 civilians tried to seek refuge at a nearby base of the U.N. Interim Force in Lebanon (UNIFIL) seeking shelter , but went home after officials were unable to confirm the warning by Israel, UNIFIL spokesman Milos Strugar told Reuters.
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Original:  Those who tried to leave later were killed in the missile strike.
Revised:  Those trying to leave were killed in the missile strike.
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Original:  When U.N peacekeepers were retrieving the remains of one Lebanese child who died, they could see his two charred hands still holding the bread of a sandwich ( which he had apparently been eating when the Israeli missile killed him ) to his chest.
Revised:  When U.N . peacekeepers retrieved the remains of one Lebanese child who died, they could see his two charred hands still holding the bread of a sandwich ( which he had apparently been eating when the Israeli missile killed him ) to his chest.
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Original:  When U.N peacekeepers were retrieving the remains of one Lebanese child who died, they could see his two charred hands still holding the bread of a sandwich ( which he had apparently been eating when the Israeli missile killed him ) to his chest.
Revised:  When U.N peacekeepers were retrieving the remains of one Lebanese child who died, they could see his two charred hands still holding the bread of a sandwich , which he had apparently been eating when the Israeli missile killed him ) to his chest.
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Original:  When U.N peacekeepers were retrieving the remains of one Lebanese child who died, they could see his two charred hands still holding the bread of a sandwich ( which he had apparently been eating when the Israeli missile killed him ) to his chest.
Revised:  When U.N peacekeepers were retrieving the remains of one Lebanese child who died, they could see his two charred hands still holding the bread of a sandwich ( which he had apparently been eating when the Israeli missile killed him , to his chest.
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Original:  Relatives of the victims blamed UNIFIL for the deaths, pelting peacekeepers with stones when they arrived with the bodies after the missile strike.
Revised:  Relatives of the victims blamed U.N. forces for the deaths, pelting peacekeepers with stones when they arrived with the bodies after the missile strike.
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Original:  Mohammed Oqla, who was at the hospital  said, "If they had taken people in to begin with then they would never have died."
Revised:  Mohammed Oqla, who was at the hospital , said, "If they had taken people in to begin with then they would never have died."
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Original:  Israel fired on the vehicle as part of their wider offensive on Lebanonwhich was a response to an attack on Israel by Hezbollah on Wednesday, who had captured two Israeli soldiers .
Revised:  Israel fired on the vehicle as part of their widened offensive in Lebanon, responding to Hezbollah's attacks on Israel on Wednesday .
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Original:  Israel apologizes Israel has since apologized for the incident :
Revised:  Israel apologizes Israel has since apologized for the incident .
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Original: Relatives of the victims blamed U.N. forces for the deaths, pelting peacekeepers with stones when they arrived with the bodies after the missile strike.
Revised: Relatives of the victims were angered with U.N. forces for the deaths, pelting peacekeepers with stones when they arrived with the bodies after the missile strike.
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Original: Relatives of the victims blamed U.N. forces for the deaths, pelting peacekeepers with stones when they arrived with the bodies after the missile strike.
Revised: Relatives of the victims blamed U.N. forces over the deaths, pelting peacekeepers with stones when they arrived with the bodies after the missile strike.
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Original: However, the incident is regarded as a deliberate act since it's not the first time Israel kills civilians.
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Original:  Civilian casualties thus far total 148 in Lebanon and 23 in Israel .
Revised:  Civilian casualties remain high on both sides .
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Original:   Israel has since been bombing various military and civilian targets inside Lebanon  . Civilian casualties remain high on both sides.
Revised:  Israel has been bombing various military and civilian targets inside Lebanon . Civilian casualties remain high on both sides.
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Original:   Israel has since been bombing various military and civilian targets inside Lebanon  . Civilian casualties remain high on both sides.
Revised:  Israel has since been bombing various military and civilian targets inside Lebanon . Civilian casualties have been high on both sides.
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Original: Israel and Hezbollah have been trading attacks since Wednesday.
Revised: Israel andHezbollah have been trading attacks since Wednesday.
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Original: Israel andHezbollah have been trading attacks since Wednesday.
Revised: Israel and Hezbollah have been trading attacks since Wednesday.
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Original: Israel has been bombing various military and civilian targets inside Lebanon, while Hezbollah has been firing less accurate missles of varying length into Israel cities.
Revised: Israel has been bombing various military and civilian targets inside Lebanon, while Hezbollah has been firing less accurate missles of varying length into Israeli cities.
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Original: He said the party would be damaged if Mr Blair remained in Downing Street after this year’s Labour conference, which is held in Manchester in two months’ time.
Revised: He said the party would be damaged if Mr Blair remained in Downing Street after this year’s Labour conference, which will be held in Manchester in two months’ time.
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Original:  Lord Hattersley, who was the former MP for Birmingham Sparkbrook, added that Scottish chancellor Gordon Brown was the best heir to Mr Blair : "I think Gordon Brown increasingly becomes the ideal next leader of the Labour party," he said.
Revised:  Lord Hattersley, who was the former MP for Birmingham Sparkbrook, added that Scottish chancellor Gordon Brown was the best heir to Mr Blair . "I think Gordon Brown increasingly becomes the ideal next leader of the Labour party," he said.
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Original:  Liberal Democrat party president Simon Hughes said : "Roy Hattersley's call for the prime minister to go this year just piles on the pressure.
Revised:  Liberal Democrat party president Simon Hughes said , "Roy Hattersley's call for the prime minister to go this year just piles on the pressure.
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Original: Smoke was spotted Friday afternoon in the BWCAW about one mile southwest of Seagull Lake.
Revised: Smoke was spotted Friday afternoon in the wilderness area about one mile southwest of Seagull Lake.
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Original:  This area of the 1 million acre wilderness was hit by a severe windstorm in 1999  which killed millions of trees, increasing concern about the future threat of wildfires.
Revised:  This area of the 1 million acre wilderness was hit by a severe windstorm in 1999 , which killed millions of trees, increasing concern about the future threat of wildfires.
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Original:  Fire fighters are not yet on the ground due to the location of the fire in a remote area inaccessible by trails or lakes.
Revised:  Firefighters are not yet on the ground due to the location of the fire in a remote area inaccessible by trails or lakes.
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Original:  Fire fighters are not yet on the ground due to the location of the fire in a remote area inaccessible by trails or lakes.
Revised:  Fire fighters are not yet on the ground , as the fire is located in a remote area inaccessible by trails or lakes.
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Original:  The cause of the fire is not yet known             
Revised:  The cause of the fire is not yet known . 
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Original: July 16, 2006 A heat wave in the upper Midwest has people trying to stay cool, while the National Guard is activated by Minnesota Governor Tim Pawlenty to fight a new wildfire in the Boundary Waters Canoe Area Wilderness.
Revised:  A heat wave in the upper Midwest has people trying to stay cool, while the National Guard is activated by Minnesota Governor Tim Pawlenty to fight a new wildfire in the Boundary Waters Canoe Area Wilderness.
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Original: July 16, 2006 A heat wave in the upper Midwest has people trying to stay cool, while the National Guard is activated by Minnesota Governor Tim Pawlenty to fight a new wildfire in the Boundary Waters Canoe Area Wilderness.
Revised: July 16, 2006 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Temperatures cracked 100 degrees Fahrenheit (38 Celsius) in St. Paul, Minnesota, and reached a record-breaking 96 degrees Fahrenheit (35.5 Celcius) in Duluth, Minnesota.
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Original: The international nature of the crisis between Israel, Lebanon and Hezbollah was discussed in an emergency summit of the Arab League in Cairo  Egypt, Saturday, and by the Group of Eight leaders in St Petersburg, Russia, Sunday.
Revised: The international nature of the crisis between Israel, Lebanon and Hezbollah was discussed in an emergency summit of the Arab League in Cairo , Egypt, Saturday, and by the Group of Eight leaders in St Petersburg, Russia, Sunday.
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Original: The international nature of the crisis between Israel, Lebanon and Hezbollah was discussed in an emergency summit of the Arab League in Cairo  Egypt, Saturday, and by the Group of Eight leaders in St Petersburg, Russia, Sunday.
Revised: The international nature of the crisis between Israel, Lebanon and Hezbollah was discussed in an emergency summit of the Arab League in Cairo Egypt, Saturday, and by Group of Eight leaders in St Petersburg, Russia, Sunday.
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Original:  The Arab League failed to reach  agreement on the issue while the Group of Eight released a joint statement.
Revised:  The Arab League failed to reach an agreement on the issue while the Group of Eight released a joint statement.
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Original:  The meetings came after Hezbollah attacked Israel on July 12, killed six soldiers and kidnapped two.
Revised:  The meetings came after Hezbollah attacked Israel on July 12, killing six soldiers and kidnapped two.
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Original:  The meetings came after Hezbollah attacked Israel on July 12, killed six soldiers and kidnapped two.
Revised:  The meetings came after Hezbollah attacked Israel on July 12, killed six soldiers and kidnapping two.
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Original:  Israel then attacked Lebanon which lead to over 100 civilian deaths while Hezbollah fired back 700 missiles across the border which caused civilian casualties in Israeli towns, including Haifa.
Revised:  Israel retaliated by attacking Lebanon, which lead to over 100 civilian deaths while Hezbollah fired back 700 missiles across the border which caused civilian casualties in Israeli towns, including Haifa.
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Original:  Israel then attacked Lebanon which lead to over 100 civilian deaths while Hezbollah fired back 700 missiles across the border which caused civilian casualties in Israeli towns, including Haifa.
Revised:  Israel then attacked Lebanon which lead to over 100 civilian deaths . Hezbollah subsequently fired 700 missiles across the border which caused civilian casualties in Israeli towns, including Haifa.
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Original:  Israel then attacked Lebanon which lead to over 100 civilian deaths while Hezbollah fired back 700 missiles across the border which caused civilian casualties in Israeli towns, including Haifa.
Revised:  Israel then attacked Lebanon which lead to over 100 civilian deaths while Hezbollah fired back 700 missiles across the border , causing civilian casualties in Israeli towns, including Haifa.
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Original:  Arab League The Arab League convened a one day meeting on the crisis in the Levant , Saturday, in Cairo, together with member countries Foreign Ministers , on the invitation of Arab League Secretary-General Amr Moussa.
Revised:  Arab League The Arab League convened a one-day meeting on the crisis in the Levant , Saturday, in Cairo, together with member countries Foreign Ministers , on the invitation of Arab League Secretary-General Amr Moussa.
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Original:  Arab League The Arab League convened a one day meeting on the crisis in the Levant , Saturday, in Cairo, together with member countries Foreign Ministers , on the invitation of Arab League Secretary-General Amr Moussa.
Revised:  Arab League The Arab League convened a one day meeting on the crisis in the Levant in Cairo, together with member countries Foreign Ministers , on the invitation of Arab League Secretary-General Amr Moussa.
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Original:  Arab League The Arab League convened a one day meeting on the crisis in the Levant , Saturday, in Cairo, together with member countries Foreign Ministers , on the invitation of Arab League Secretary-General Amr Moussa.
Revised:  Arab League The Arab League convened a one day meeting on the crisis in the Levant , Saturday, in Cairo, together with member countries ' foreign ministers , on the invitation of Arab League Secretary-General Amr Moussa.
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Original:  The Council of Arab Foreign Ministers failed to reach  agreement on a joint statement about the conflict in and instead released separate statements.
Revised:  The Council of Arab Foreign Ministers failed to reach an agreement on a joint statement about the conflict in and instead released separate statements.
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Original:  The Council of Arab Foreign Ministers failed to reach  agreement on a joint statement about the conflict in and instead released separate statements.
Revised:  The Council of Arab Foreign Ministers failed to reach agreement on a joint statement about the conflict and instead released separate statements.
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Original:  There was however disagreement over Hezbollah.
Revised:  There was , however, disagreement over Hezbollah.
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Original:  "These extremist elements and those that support them cannot be allowed to plunge the Middle East into chaos," said the leaders in the agreed, jointly-released , statement.
Revised:  "These extremist elements and those that support them cannot be allowed to plunge the Middle East into chaos," said the leaders in the jointly-released , statement.
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Original:  "These extremist elements and those that support them cannot be allowed to plunge the Middle East into chaos," said the leaders in the agreed, jointly-released , statement.
Revised:  "These extremist elements and those that support them cannot be allowed to plunge the Middle East into chaos," said the leaders in the agreed, jointly-released statement.
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Original:  First they demanded Hezbollah release the taken Israeli soldiers and stop their attacks on Israel.
Revised:  They demanded Hezbollah release the taken Israeli soldiers and stop their attacks on Israel.
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Original:  " We demand first that the Israeli soldiers be returned to Israel healthy, that the attackson Israel cease,and then naturally for Israel to halt military action, " said German Chancellor Angela Merkel .
Revised:  " The extremists must immediately halt their attacks, " said German Chancellor Angela Merkel .
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Original:  The Group of Eight leaders blamed the violence on "extremists" and accepted Israel's right to defend against attacks - as long as they did so proportionally.
Revised:  The Group of Eight leaders also accepted Israel's right to defend against attacks - as long as they did so proportionally.
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Original:  Hezbollah subsequently fired 700 missiles across the border, causing civilian casualties in Israeli towns, including Haifa.
Revised:  Hezbollah has fired 700 missiles across the border, causing civilian casualties in Israeli towns, including Haifa.
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Original: Parliament Hill demonstrators in Ottawa on Sunday protested Harper's position as being seen as pro-Israeli by some ;
Revised: Parliament Hill demonstrators in Ottawa on Sunday protested Harper's position , seeing it as pro-Israeli by some ;
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Original: Parliament Hill demonstrators in Ottawa on Sunday protested Harper's position as being seen as pro-Israeli by some ;
Revised: Parliament Hill demonstrators in Ottawa on Sunday protested Harper's position as being seen as pro-Israeli ;
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