wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  "Respect for stay-at-home mothers has been poisoned by a toxic combination of the village elders' war on the traditional family and radical feminism's misogynistic crusade to make working outside the home the only marker of social value and self-respect. 
Revised:  "Respect for stay-at-home mothers has been poisoned by a toxic combination of the village elders' war on the traditional family and radical feminism's misogynistic crusade to make working outside the home the only marker of social value and self-respect. " "The African proverb says, 'It takes a village to raise a child." "The American version is 'It takes a village to raise a child - if the village wants that child.'
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Original: 100px|right A book by US Senator Rick Santorum (R-PA), entitled "It Takes a Family: Conservatism and the Common Good", hit stores in Washington over the weekend.
Revised: Rick Santorum A book by US Senator Rick Santorum (R-PA), entitled "It Takes a Family: Conservatism and the Common Good", hit stores in Washington over the weekend.
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Original: The Pew Internet & American Life Project is a non-profit research centre that produces reports that study the social effects of the Internet  
Revised: The Pew Internet & American Life Project is a non-profit research centre that produces reports that study the social effects of the Internet . 
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Original:  78\% said they “had a good idea what the term meant ”. 61\% said they were Very confident or somewhat confident they could keep things like computer viruses, spyware and adware off there computer.
Revised:  78\% said they “had a good idea what the term meant .” 61\% said they were Very confident or somewhat confident they could keep things like computer viruses, spyware and adware off there computer.
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Original:  78\% said they “had a good idea what the term meant ”. 61\% said they were Very confident or somewhat confident they could keep things like computer viruses, spyware and adware off there computer.
Revised:  78\% said they “had a good idea what the term meant ”. 61\% said they were very confident or somewhat confident they could keep things like computer viruses, spyware and adware off there computer.
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Original:  These problems include, computer slowing down, crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers, and Internet home page changing with out user action.
Revised:  These problems include, computers slowing down, crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers, and Internet home page changing with out user action.
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Original:  49\% consider spyware to be a serious threat to their online security .91 \% of internet users say they have made at least one change in their online behaviour as a result of spyware.
Revised:  49\% consider spyware to be a serious threat to their online security . 91 \% of internet users say they have made at least one change in their online behaviour as a result of spyware.
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Original:  Of the 2,001 adults surveyed  97\% said that they had heard of the term spyware . 78\% said they “had a good idea what the term meant.” 61\% said they were very confident or somewhat confident they could keep things like computer viruses, spyware and adware off there computer.
Revised:  Of the 2,001 adults surveyed , 97\% said that they had heard of the term spyware . 78\% said they “had a good idea what the term meant.” 61\% said they were very confident or somewhat confident they could keep things like computer viruses, spyware and adware off there computer.
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Original:  Of the 2,001 adults surveyed  97\% said that they had heard of the term spyware . 78\% said they “had a good idea what the term meant.” 61\% said they were very confident or somewhat confident they could keep things like computer viruses, spyware and adware off there computer.
Revised:  Of the 2,001 adults surveyed 97\% said that they had heard of the term spyware and 78\% said they “had a good idea what the term meant.” 61\% said they were very confident or somewhat confident they could keep things like computer viruses, spyware and adware off there computer.
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Original:  However  34\% said they have had spyware on their home computers.
Revised:  However , 34\% said they have had spyware on their home computers.
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Original:  In October 2004, Study by AOL and the National Cyber Security Alliance  53\% of respondents said they had spyware or adware on their computers, but a scan showed that 80\% of respondents actually had such programs installed.
Revised:  In October 2004, in a study by AOL and the National Cyber Security Alliance 53\% of respondents said they had spyware or adware on their computers, but a scan showed that 80\% of respondents actually had such programs installed.
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Original:  In October 2004, Study by AOL and the National Cyber Security Alliance  53\% of respondents said they had spyware or adware on their computers, but a scan showed that 80\% of respondents actually had such programs installed.
Revised:  In October 2004, Study by AOL and the National Cyber Security Alliance , 53\% of respondents said they had spyware or adware on their computers, but a scan showed that 80\% of respondents actually had such programs installed.
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Original:  These problems include , computers slowing down , crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers , and Internet home page changing with out user action.
Revised:  These problems include computers slowing down , crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers , and Internet home page changing with out user action.
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Original:  These problems include , computers slowing down , crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers , and Internet home page changing with out user action.
Revised:  These problems include , computers slowing down or crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers , and Internet home page changing with out user action.
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Original:  These problems include , computers slowing down , crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers , and Internet home page changing with out user action.
Revised:  These problems include , computers slowing down , crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers and Internet home page changing with out user action.
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Original:  In  October 2004 , in a study by AOL and the National Cyber Security Alliance, 53\% of respondents said they had spyware or adware on their computers, but a scan showed that 80\% of respondents actually had such programs installed.
Revised:  In an October 2004 , in a study by AOL and the National Cyber Security Alliance, 53\% of respondents said they had spyware or adware on their computers, but a scan showed that 80\% of respondents actually had such programs installed.
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Original:  In  October 2004 , in a study by AOL and the National Cyber Security Alliance, 53\% of respondents said they had spyware or adware on their computers, but a scan showed that 80\% of respondents actually had such programs installed.
Revised:  In October 2004 study, by AOL and the National Cyber Security Alliance, 53\% of respondents said they had spyware or adware on their computers, but a scan showed that 80\% of respondents actually had such programs installed.
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Original:  These problems include computers slowing down or crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers and Internet home page changing with out user action.
Revised:  These problems include computers slowing down or crashing, new unfamiliar programs appearing on their computers and Internet home page changing without user action.
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Original: According to a report  the Pew Internet & American Life Project, 9 out of 10 Internet users have adjusted their online behaviour because of spyware.
Revised: According to a report by the Pew Internet & American Life Project, 9 out of 10 Internet users have adjusted their online behaviour because of spyware.
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Original: Casualties Stations closed or affected People trapped in the underground.
Revised: Casualties People trapped in the underground.
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Original: At 11:30 BST (UTC+1) St. Mary ’ s Hospital released a statement that they have admitted 4 critical, 8 severe and several minor injures.
Revised: At 11:30 BST (UTC+1) St. Mary ' s Hospital released a statement that they have admitted 4 critical, 8 severe and several minor injures.
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Original: It has been reported that in the early stages of the attack, information was only distributed to civilians within the center of London, and authoritories had a specific policy of not providing information to the global media, in case any information provided to the media could be used by additional terrorists to target vulnerable locations during an evacuation procedure.
Revised: It has been reported that in the early stages of the attack, information was only distributed to civilians within the center of London, and authorities had a specific policy of not providing information to the global media, in case any information provided to the media could be used by additional terrorists to target vulnerable locations during an evacuation procedure.
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Original:  All emergency services are responding en masse to a "major incident" and are responding only to life-threatening emergency calls.
Revised:  All emergency services are responding en-masse to a "major incident" and are responding only to life-threatening emergency calls.
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Original: Reports Image:Russell square ushering.jpg|Russell Square cordoned off The first reports that came in were from London's Liverpool Street station talking of an explosion on the Metropolitan Underground line and the station being evacuated.
Revised: Reports The first reports that came in were from London's Liverpool Street station talking of an explosion on the Metropolitan Underground line and the station being evacuated.
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Original: Reporters Without Borders has called for an investigation of the Munadi killing stating that "The tragedy that took place this morning in northern Afghanistan raises many questions ". U.S. military officials confirmed the raid was carried out by NATO and Afghan soldiers;
Revised: Reporters Without Borders has called for an investigation of the Munadi killing stating that "The tragedy that took place this morning in northern Afghanistan raises many questions ." U.S. military officials confirmed the raid was carried out by NATO and Afghan soldiers;
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Original: This past week, British Commandos saved a a British journalist, Stephen Farrell from what could have been a very dangerous situation as he had been abducted by Taliban insurgents in Kunduz Province, Afghanistan last weekend.
Revised: This past week, British Commandos saved a British journalist, Stephen Farrell from what could have been a very dangerous situation as he had been abducted by Taliban insurgents in Kunduz Province, Afghanistan last weekend.
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Original: JPG| Kunduz Province, Afghanistan in 2005 ]] Farrell, a journalist from The New York Times and dual British-Irish citizen, and his Afghan interpreter, Sultan Munadi, were taken captive by the Taliban while covering a September 4th bombing by coalition aircraft not far from Konduz City, Afghanistan.
Revised: JPG| Province, Afghanistan in 2005 ]] Farrell, a journalist from The New York Times and dual British-Irish citizen, and his Afghan interpreter, Sultan Munadi, were taken captive by the Taliban while covering a September 4th bombing by coalition aircraft not far from Konduz City, Afghanistan.
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Original:  NY Times Executive Editor Bill Keller earlier said "We feared that media attention would raise the temperature and increase the risk to the captives."
Revised:  NY Times Executive Editor earlier said "We feared that media attention would raise the temperature and increase the risk to the captives."
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Original:  In November 2008, reporter David S. Rohde and his colleague Tahir Ludin were taken captive south of Kabul and moved to Pakistan before they managed to escape in June of this year.
Revised:  In November 2008, reporter and his colleague Tahir Ludin were taken captive south of Kabul and moved to Pakistan before they managed to escape in June of this year.
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Original:  Farrell was also kidnapped in April 2004 while on-assignment in Fallujah , Iraq.
Revised:  Farrell was also kidnapped in April 2004 while on-assignment in , Iraq.
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Original:  Whilst US markets have not yet opened, it is expected that Wall Street will drop sharply upon opening Thursday morning.
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Original:  Decline in value of major travel and insurance stocks In Paris the Cac 40 Index of France's forty largest companies took an even worse beating, dropping almost 4\% by 11:47UTC by 170.37 points to 4109.58. Among the top losers was Axa Insurance which dropped by 5.4\%.
Revised:  In Paris the Cac 40 Index of France's forty largest companies took an even worse beating, dropping almost 4\% by 11:47UTC by 170.37 points to 4109.58. Among the top losers was Axa Insurance which dropped by 5.4\%.
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Original:  United States markets have fallen significantly as well, with the Dow having fallen by 65 points, the S&P 500 7.57, and the NASDAQ 7.51 as of 13:43UTC .
Revised:  United States markets have fallen significantly as well, with the Dow having fallen by 65 points, the S&P 500 7.57, and the NASDAQ 7.51 as of 13:43UTC 
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Original: 250px|The FTSE reacted quickly to the blasts International stock markets fell sharply Thursday upon news that London was hit by a series of coordinated explosions.
Revised: 250px|The FTSE reacted quickly to the blasts Some stock markets fell sharply Thursday upon news that London was hit by a series of coordinated explosions.
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Original:  Financial markets across the globe have lost billions in value amid uncertainty about the causes of this morning's blasts in London.
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Original:  The FTSE 100 Share Index plummeted over 150 points down , over 2.8\%.
Revised:  The FTSE 100 Share Index fell over 150 points down , over 2.8\%.
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Original:  The FTSE 100 Share Index plummeted over 150 points down , over 2.8\%.
Revised:  The FTSE 100 Share Index plummeted over 150 points , over 2.8\%.
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Original:  It ceased to be shown on Friday after a 26 year long run becase of a funding shortfall of several hundred thousand dollars needed to renew the broadcast rights.
Revised:  It ceased to be shown on Friday after a 26 year long run because of a funding shortfall of several hundred thousand dollars needed to renew the broadcast rights.
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Original:  Each episode of the show would focus on a theme in a specific book  then explore that theme through multiple stories.
Revised:  Each episode of the show would focus on a theme in a specific book and then explore that theme through multiple stories.
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Original:  It ceased to be shown on Friday (4 Sep) after a 26 year long run because of a funding shortfall of several hundred thousand dollars needed to renew the broadcast rights.
Revised:  It ceased to be shown on Friday after a 26 year long run because of a funding shortfall of several hundred thousand dollars needed to renew the broadcast rights.
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Original:  Coleman discussed the situation with BringMeTheNews reporter Rick Kupchella — in his first in-depth, on-camera interview since the U.S. Senate recount ended in June.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The former senator said he first began experiencing symptoms of the condition — on a late-night flight from Washington, D.C. to Minneapolis on Wednesday, Sept. 2. He says it started with the realization that, while talking with fellow passengers, he was "smiling out of one side of my face." "It's a big surprise when half your face is working — and the other half isn't," Coleman said.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "It's a big surprise when half your face is working — and the other half isn't," Coleman said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The former senator said he first began experiencing symptoms of the condition — on a late-night flight from Washington, D.C. to Minneapolis on Wednesday, Sept. 2. He says it started with the realization that, while talking with fellow passengers, he was "smiling out of one side of my face." "It's a big surprise when half your face is working — and the other half isn't," Coleman said.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The former senator said he first began experiencing symptoms of the condition — on a late-night flight from Washington, D.C. to Minneapolis on Wednesday, Sept. 2. He says it started with the realization that, while talking with fellow passengers, he was "smiling out of one side of my face." 
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Original:  The condition has resulted in partial paralysis of the left side of Coleman's face — due to inflammation of the nerves leading there . Bell's palsy tends to imitate the symptoms of a stroke.
Revised:  The condition has resulted in partial paralysis of the left side of Coleman's face due to inflammation of the nerves leading there . Bell's palsy tends to imitate the symptoms of a stroke.
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Original:  The condition has resulted in partial paralysis of the left side of Coleman's face — due to inflammation of the nerves leading there . Bell's palsy tends to imitate the symptoms of a stroke.
Revised:  The condition has resulted in partial paralysis of the left side of Coleman's face — due to inflammation of the nerves leading to that area . Bell's palsy tends to imitate the symptoms of a stroke.
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Original:  Doctors have told him he should recover fully . Coleman discussed the situation with BringMeTheNews reporter Rick Kupchella — in his first in-depth, on-camera interview since the U.S. Senate recount ended in June.
Revised:  Doctors have told Coleman that he should fully recover . Coleman discussed the situation with BringMeTheNews reporter Rick Kupchella — in his first in-depth, on-camera interview since the U.S. Senate recount ended in June.
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Original:  Doctors have told him he should recover fully . Coleman discussed the situation with BringMeTheNews reporter Rick Kupchella — in his first in-depth, on-camera interview since the U.S. Senate recount ended in June.
Revised:  Doctors have told him he should recover fully . Coleman discussed the situation with BringMeTheNews reporter Rick Kupchella in his first in-depth, on-camera interview since the U.S. Senate recount ended in June.
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Original:  The former senator said he first began experiencing symptoms of the condition on a late-night flight from Washington, D.C. to Minneapolis on Wednesday, Sept. 2. He says it started with the realization that, while talking with fellow passengers, he was "smiling out of one side of my face."
Revised:  The former Senator said he first began experiencing symptoms of the condition on a late-night flight from Washington, D.C. to Minneapolis on Wednesday, Sept. 2. He says it started with the realization that, while talking with fellow passengers, he was "smiling out of one side of my face."
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Original:  The former senator said he first began experiencing symptoms of the condition on a late-night flight from Washington, D.C. to Minneapolis on Wednesday, Sept. 2. He says it started with the realization that, while talking with fellow passengers, he was "smiling out of one side of my face."
Revised:  The former senator said he first began experiencing symptoms of the condition on a late-night flight from Washington, D.C. to Minneapolis on Wednesday, September 2. He says it started with the realization that, while talking with fellow passengers, he was "smiling out of one side of my face."
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Original:  He proclamied : "It [Toy Story 3] is shaping up to be another great adventure for Buzz, Woody and the gang from Andy's room.
Revised:  He proclaimed : "It [Toy Story 3] is shaping up to be another great adventure for Buzz, Woody and the gang from Andy's room.
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Original: At least 2 people wounded after two freight train collided with each other near Kotri railway station in southern Pakistan on Thursday.
Revised: At least 2 people wounded after two freight train collided with each other near Kotri in southern Pakistan on Thursday.
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Original:  A freight train was on the track at the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad | bound freight train  loaded with oil drums hit it and a fire broke out.
Revised:  A freight train was on the track near the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad | bound freight train loaded with oil drums hit it and a fire broke out.
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Original:  A freight train was on the track at the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad | bound freight train  loaded with oil drums hit it and a fire broke out.
Revised:  A freight train was on the track at the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad bound freight train loaded with oil drums hit it and a fire broke out.
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Original: At least 2 people wounded after two freight train collided with each other near Kotri in southern Pakistan on Thursday .
Revised: At least two people were wounded after two freight train collided with each other near Kotri in southern Pakistan on Thursday .
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Original:  A freight train was on the track near the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad bound freight train coming from Karachi  loaded with oil drums  hit it and a fire broke out.
Revised:  A freight train was on the track near the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad-bound freight train coming from Karachi loaded with oil drums hit it and a fire broke out.
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Original:  A freight train was on the track near the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad bound freight train coming from Karachi  loaded with oil drums  hit it and a fire broke out.
Revised:  A freight train was on the track near the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad bound freight train coming from Karachi , loaded with oil drums hit it and a fire broke out.
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Original:  A freight train was on the track near the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad bound freight train coming from Karachi  loaded with oil drums  hit it and a fire broke out.
Revised:  A freight train was on the track near the Kotri railway station when a Hyderabad bound freight train coming from Karachi loaded with oil drums , hit it and a fire broke out.
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Original:  Six good wagons of the freight train carrying oil were derailed, and oil was spilled.
Revised:  Six goods wagons of the freight train carrying oil were derailed, and oil was spilled.
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Original:  The up and down country rail traffic suspended on the track following this incident
Revised:  Rail traffic in both directions has been suspended on the track following this incident
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Original:  " Category:United States Category:Politics and conflicts Category:California Category:Wackyne
Revised:  Category:United States Category:Politics and conflicts Category:California Category:Wackyne
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Original:  " Category:United States Category:Politics and conflicts Category:California Category:Wackyne
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