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Original:  The principal said the original version of the questions listed 'peCENSORED' and later had se added to the end as "humour".
Revised:  The principal said the original version of the questions listed 'peCENSORED' and later had 'se' added to the end as "humour".
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Original: The average price of a home is dropping by £20,000 down to £164,654  losing 10.5\% of its value.
Revised: The average price of a home has dropped by £20,000 down to £164,654 losing 10.5\% of its value.
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Original: The average price of a home is dropping by £20,000 down to £164,654  losing 10.5\% of its value.
Revised: The average price of a home is dropping by £20,000 down to £164,654 , losing 10.5\% of its value.
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Original:  Property value fell by 1.9\% in the past month, and 1.5\% in July.
Revised:  Property values fell by 1.9\% in the past month, and 1.5\% in July.
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Original: House prices in the UK are falling at the fastest rate since 1990, according to Nationwide Building Society.
Revised: House prices in the United Kingdom are now falling at the fastest rate since 1990, according to Nationwide Building Society.
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Original:  The 'Baghdad Eye ' as it is being called is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
Revised:  The 'Baghdad Eye as it is being called is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
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Original: Iraq officals are planning on bringing a tourist attraction to war-torn capital Baghdad.
Revised: Iraqi officals are planning on bringing a tourist attraction to war-torn capital Baghdad.
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Original:  The 'Baghdad Eye  as it is being called is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
Revised:  The 'Baghdad Eye ' as it is being called is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
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Original: The  Foreign Office advises against all travel to Baghdad.
Revised: The United Kingdom's Foreign Office advises against all travel to Baghdad.
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Original:  One spokesman said "The security situation in Iraq remains highly dangerous with a continuing high threat of terrorism throughout the country "
Revised:  A spokesperson said "The security situation in Iraq remains highly dangerous with a continuing high threat of terrorism throughout the country "
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Original:  One spokesman said "The security situation in Iraq remains highly dangerous with a continuing high threat of terrorism throughout the country "
Revised:  One spokesman said "The security situation in Iraq remains highly dangerous with a continuing high threat of terrorism throughout the country .
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Original:  The 'Baghdad Eye'  as it is being called  is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
Revised:  The 'Baghdad Eye' , as it is being called is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
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Original:  The 'Baghdad Eye'  as it is being called  is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
Revised:  The 'Baghdad Eye' as it is being called , is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
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Original: Iraqi officals are planning on bringing a ferris wheel as a tourist attraction to war-torn capital Baghdad.
Revised: Iraqi officials are planning on bringing a ferris wheel as a tourist attraction to war-torn capital Baghdad.
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Original: Iraqi officals are planning on bringing a ferris wheel as a tourist attraction to war-torn capital Baghdad.
Revised: Iraqi officals are planning on building a ferris wheel as a tourist attraction to war-torn capital Baghdad.
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Original: Iraqi officals are planning on bringing a ferris wheel as a tourist attraction to war-torn capital Baghdad.
Revised: Iraqi officals are planning on bringing a ferris wheel as a tourist attraction to the nation's capital, Baghdad.
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Original:  The  'Baghdad Eye' , as it is being called, is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
Revised:  The wheel would be called 'Baghdad Eye' , as it is being called, is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
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Original:  The  'Baghdad Eye' , as it is being called, is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
Revised:  The 'Baghdad Eye' and is planned to sit over 650ft above the Tigris River.
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Original:  He failed to comment on construction cost or a timeline of how long it would take to build the wheel.
Revised:  He failed to comment on construction cost or a time line of how long it would take to build the wheel.
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Original: Iraqi officials are planning on building a ferris wheel  as a tourist attraction to the nation's capital, Baghdad.
Revised: Iraqi officials are planning on having a ferris wheel as a tourist attraction to the nation's capital, Baghdad.
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Original:  It has attracted more than 27 million visitors since it's formal opening on December 31, 1999.
Revised:  It has attracted more than 27 million visitors since its formal opening on December 31, 1999.
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Original: Iraqi officials are planning on having a ferris wheel built as a tourist attraction to the nation's capital, Baghdad.
Revised: Iraqi officials are planning on having a Ferris wheel built as a tourist attraction to the nation's capital, Baghdad.
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Original:  The wheel would be called 'Baghdad Eye' and is planned to sit over 650 ft above the Tigris River .
Revised:  The wheel would be called 'Baghdad Eye' and is planned to sit over 650 ft above the .
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Original: The London Eye in London , England sits 443 ft over the River Thames .
Revised: The London Eye in , England sits 443 ft over the River Thames .
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Original: The London Eye in London , England sits 443 ft over the River Thames .
Revised: The London Eye in London , England sits 443 ft over the .
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Original:  The United Kingdom's Foreign Office advises against all travel to Baghdad.
Revised:  The United Kingdom's advises against all travel to Baghdad.
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Original: Phil Hill  the American Formula One racing driver has died age 81 in Salinas, California.
Revised: Phil Hill , the American Formula One racing driver has died age 81 in Salinas, California.
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Original:  Phil became ill with Parkinson's Disease.
Revised:  Phil died from complications from Parkinson's Disease.
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Original:  His son Derek, also a racing driver had to retire to look after his father.
Revised:  His son Derek, also a racecar driver had to retire to look after his father.
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Original:  [[Image:HillPhil1962.jpg|Phil Hill  1962 at the Nürburgring  ]] Phil is to date the only American to win a Formula One racing title.
Revised:  [[Image:HillPhil1962.jpg|Phil Hill in 1962 at the Nürburgring ]] Phil is to date the only American to win a Formula One racing title.
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Original:  He won the 1961 season in finishing above  Wolfgang von Trips  who died in a crash during the Italian Grand Prix.
Revised:  He won the 1961 season . Wolfgang von Trips who died in a crash during the Italian Grand Prix.
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Original:  He won the 1961 season in finishing above  Wolfgang von Trips  who died in a crash during the Italian Grand Prix.
Revised:  He won the 1961 season in finishing above Wolfgang von Trips , who died in a crash during the Italian Grand Prix.
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Original:  As well as winning the  F1 Season, Phil  won the 24 Hours of Le Mans three times in 1958, 1961 and 1962.
Revised:  As well as winning the F1 Season, Phil also won the 24 Hours of Le Mans three times in 1958, 1961 and 1962.
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Original:  He judged at the Pebble Beach Concours d'Elegance a record 38 times  
Revised:  He judged at the Pebble Beach Concours d'Elegance a record 38 times . 
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Original: ]] Phil is to date the only American to win the Formula One World Drivers' Championship when he won the 1961 season  .
Revised: ]] Phil is to date the only American-born driver to win the Formula One World Drivers' Championship when he won the 1961 season .
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Original: ]] Phil is to date the only American-born driver to win the Formula One World Drivers' Championship when he won the 1961 season.
Revised: ]] Phil was the first American-born driver to win the Formula One World Drivers' Championship when he won the 1961 season.
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Original:  He failed to win another  race after the 1961 season.
Revised:  He failed to win another F1 race after the 1961 season.
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Original: Phil Hill, the American Formula One racecar driver, has died today at age 81 in Salinas, California.
Revised: Phil Hill, the American Formula One race-car driver, has died today at age 81 in Salinas, California.
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Original:  The bilateral agreement also includes participation in the Dublin treaty , which stipulates the use of a unified European database for tracking people who are wanted, missing, or are illegal immigrants.
Revised:  The bilateral agreement also includes participation in the Dublin treaty and stipulates the use of a unified European database for tracking people who are wanted, missing, or are illegal immigrants.
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Original:  The referendum of allowing the registration of same-sex partnerships was widely welcomed with the people voting 58.03\% yes and 41.97\% no . Same-sex partnerships are already legal in the cantons of Geneva and Zürich.
Revised:  The referendum of allowing the registration of same-sex partnerships was widely welcomed with the people voting 58.03\% Yes and 41.97\% no . Same-sex partnerships are already legal in the cantons of Geneva and Zürich.
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Original:  The referendum of allowing the registration of same-sex partnerships was widely welcomed with the people voting 58.03\% yes and 41.97\% no . Same-sex partnerships are already legal in the cantons of Geneva and Zürich.
Revised:  The referendum of allowing the registration of same-sex partnerships was widely welcomed with the people voting 58.03\% yes and 41.97\% No . Same-sex partnerships are already legal in the cantons of Geneva and Zürich.
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Original:  It was passed through with the people voting 54.60\% yes and 45.40\% no .
Revised:  It was passed through with the people voting 54.60\% Yes and 45.40\% no .
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Original:  It was passed through with the people voting 54.60\% yes and 45.40\% no .
Revised:  It was passed through with the people voting 54.60\% yes and 45.40\% No .
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Original:  In the speech, Obama stated that the “ American promise has been threatened ” by eight years under President George W. Bush and that John McCain represented a continuation of policies that undermined the nation’s economy and imperiled its standing around the world
Revised:  In the speech, Obama stated that the " American promise has been threatened ” by eight years under President George W. Bush and that John McCain represented a continuation of policies that undermined the nation’s economy and imperiled its standing around the world
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Original:  In the speech, Obama stated that the “ American promise has been threatened ” by eight years under President George W. Bush and that John McCain represented a continuation of policies that undermined the nation’s economy and imperiled its standing around the world
Revised:  In the speech, Obama stated that the “ American promise has been threatened " by eight years under President George W. Bush and that John McCain represented a continuation of policies that undermined the nation’s economy and imperiled its standing around the world
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Original: Obama became the first African-American nominee for  a major political party 's presidential nomination .
Revised: Obama is the first African-American nominee for a major political party 's presidential nomination .
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Original: Obama became the first African-American nominee for  a major political party 's presidential nomination .
Revised: Obama became the first African-American nominee for President by a major political party 's presidential nomination .
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Original: Obama became the first African-American nominee for  a major political party 's presidential nomination .
Revised: Obama became the first African-American nominee for a major political party .
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Original:  His opponent John McCain will accept the Republican Party's presidential nomination next week in St. Paul Minnesota.
Revised:  His opponent John McCain will accept the Republican Party's presidential nomination next week in Saint Paul, Minnesota.
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Original:  Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield  Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston. w:Lerna David Davis Mansion, w:Bloomington, Illinois Old Cahokia Courthouse, in Cahokia Carl Sandburg State Historic Site, in Galesburg Vandalia Statehouse, in Vandalia
Revised:  Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield Lerna David Davis Mansion, in Bloomington, Illinois Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston. w:Lerna David Davis Mansion, w:Bloomington, Illinois Old Cahokia Courthouse, in Cahokia Carl Sandburg State Historic Site, in Galesburg Vandalia Statehouse, in Vandalia
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Original:  Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield  Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston. w:Lerna David Davis Mansion, w:Bloomington, Illinois Old Cahokia Courthouse, in Cahokia Carl Sandburg State Historic Site, in Galesburg Vandalia Statehouse, in Vandalia
Revised:  Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston. Old Cahokia Courthouse, in Cahokia Carl Sandburg State Historic Site, in Galesburg Vandalia Statehouse, in Vandalia
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Original:   Fort de Chartres, in Randolph County Pierre Menard Home, in Randolph County and 12 others: Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield Lerna David Davis Mansion, in Bloomington, Illinois Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston.
Revised:  Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield Lerna David Davis Mansion, in Bloomington, Illinois Fort de Chartres, in Randolph County Pierre Menard Home, in Randolph County and 12 others: Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield Lerna David Davis Mansion, in Bloomington, Illinois Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston.
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Original:   Fort de Chartres, in Randolph County Pierre Menard Home, in Randolph County and 12 others: Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield Lerna David Davis Mansion, in Bloomington, Illinois Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston.
Revised:  Fort de Chartres, in Randolph County Pierre Menard Home, in Randolph County and 12 others: Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston.
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Original:  Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield Lerna David Davis Mansion, in Bloomington, Illinois Fort de Chartres, in Randolph County Pierre Menard Home, in Randolph County and 10 others: Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston.
Revised:  Dana-Thomas House, in Springfield David Davis Mansion, in Bloomington, Illinois Fort de Chartres, in Randolph County Pierre Menard Home, in Randolph County and 10 others: Apple River Fort, in Elizabeth Bishop Hill, Henry County Bryant Cottage, in Bement Fort Kaskaskia, Randolph County Hauberg Indian Museum at Blackhawk State Historic Site in Rock Island Jubilee College, in Peoria County Lincoln Log Cabin, in Charleston.
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Original: Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich’s office announced layoffs of up to 450 state employees and the closure of 25 historic sites and parks in the state .
Revised: Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich’s office announced layoffs of up to 450 state employees and the closure of 25 historic sites and state parks.
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Original:  Fourteen state historic sites are scheduled to be closed October 1. Eleven state parks are up for closure November 1.
Revised:  Fourteen state historic sites are scheduled to be closed October 1. Eleven state parks are slated for closure November 1.
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Original:  Included in the cuts were the Illinois Department of Natural Resources  , which operates the state parks, the Department of Children and Family Services  , slated to have 179 employees cut, the Illinois Historic Preservation Agency  and the Department of Human Services, which is expected to lose 79 positions.
Revised:  Included in the cuts were the Illinois Department of Natural Resources (IDNR) , which operates the state parks, the Department of Children and Family Services , slated to have 179 employees cut, the Illinois Historic Preservation Agency and the Department of Human Services, which is expected to lose 79 positions.
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Original:  Included in the cuts were the Illinois Department of Natural Resources  , which operates the state parks, the Department of Children and Family Services  , slated to have 179 employees cut, the Illinois Historic Preservation Agency  and the Department of Human Services, which is expected to lose 79 positions.
Revised:  Included in the cuts were the Illinois Department of Natural Resources , which operates the state parks, the Department of Children and Family Services , slated to have 179 employees cut, the Illinois Historic Preservation Agency (IHPA) and the Department of Human Services, which is expected to lose 79 positions.
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Original: If the matter can not be resolved, Lapierre said ;
Revised: If the matter can not be resolved, Lapierre said ,
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Original:  After 9/11, a watch list of suspected terrorists was created  that bars those on the list from air travel within U.S. borders.
Revised:  After 9/11, a watch list of suspected terrorists was created that bars those on the list from air travel within its borders.
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Original:  The issue goes to Canada's sovereignty of its citizens and the U.S. sovereignty of its airspace  
Revised:  The issue goes to Canada's sovereignty of its citizens and the U.S. sovereignty of its airspace . 
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Original: The historically close relations between Canada and the U.S. was evident during the recent Virgin Atlantic incident where an inter-continental flight was escorted by 2 Canadian CF-18 jet fighters after they were scrambled from Quebec to see the flight to Halifax International Airport .
Revised: The historically close relations between Canada and the U.S. was evident during the recent Virgin Atlantic incident , where a flight was intercepted by 2 Canadian CF-18 jet fighters after they were scrambled from Quebec to see the flight to Halifax International Airport .
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Original: The historically close relations between Canada and the U.S. was evident during the recent Virgin Atlantic incident where an inter-continental flight was escorted by 2 Canadian CF-18 jet fighters after they were scrambled from Quebec to see the flight to Halifax International Airport .
Revised: The historically close relations between Canada and the U.S. was evident during the recent Virgin Atlantic incident where an inter-continental flight was escorted by 2 Canadian CF-18 jet fighters . They were scrambled from Quebec to see the flight to Halifax International Airport .
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Original:  The plane was cleared and ultimately landed safely to its original destination at John F. Kennedy International Airport in New York City
Revised:  The plane was cleared and ultimately landed safely to its original destination in John F. Kennedy International Airport in New York City
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Original:  Ultimately it was cleared, and landed safely at its original destination in John F. Kennedy International Airport in New York City  
Revised:  Ultimately it was cleared, and landed safely at its original destination in John F. Kennedy International Airport in New York City . 
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Original: Both the ACLU and EPIC (the Electronic Privacy Information Center) are involved in lawsuits against the U.S. government relating to no-fly lists.
Revised: Both theACLU andEPIC (the Electronic Privacy Information Center) are involved in lawsuits against the U.S. government relating to no-fly lists.
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Original: Both theACLU andEPIC (the Electronic Privacy Information Center ) are involved in lawsuits against the U.S. government relating to no-fly lists.
Revised: Both the ACLU and the Electronic Privacy Information Center ) are involved in lawsuits against the U.S. government relating to no-fly lists.
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Original: Both theACLU andEPIC (the Electronic Privacy Information Center ) are involved in lawsuits against the U.S. government relating to no-fly lists.
Revised: Both theACLU andEPIC (the Electronic Privacy Information Center are involved in lawsuits against the U.S. government relating to no-fly lists.
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Original:  The agreement is scheduled to be signed on September 2 
Revised:  The agreement is scheduled to be signed on September 2. 
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Original: Znaur Gassiyev, a speaker in the parliament of South Ossetia, said today in Tskhinvali, the capital, that the region will be annexed by Russia "in several years" or earlier.
Revised: Znaur Gassiyev, the speaker in the parliament of South Ossetia, said today in Tskhinvali, the capital, that the region will be annexed by Russia "in several years" or earlier.
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Original:  The Vice Speaker of  Georgian Parliament, Gigi Tsereteli, warned the areas, which are "autonomous republics" within Georgia, that absorption into Russia would ultimately destroy them as territorial entities.
Revised:  The Vice Speaker of the Georgian Parliament, Gigi Tsereteli, warned the areas, which are "autonomous republics" within Georgia, that absorption into Russia would ultimately destroy them as territorial entities.
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Original:  "The regimes of Abkhazia and South Ossetia should think about the fact that if they become part of Russia, they will be assimilated and in this way they will disappear," he said   .
Revised:  "The regimes of Abkhazia and South Ossetia should think about the fact that if they become part of Russia, they will be assimilated and in this way they will disappear," he said . .
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