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Original:  Most have been forced to sleep out in the open while rental prices in the city have rocketed .
Revised:  Most have been forced to sleep out in the open while rental prices in the city have skyrocketed .
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Original:  The   official government newspaper  says that 22,735 people have been arrested in the drive against "illegal structures, businesses and criminal activities".
Revised:  The The official government newspaper says that 22,735 people have been arrested in the drive against "illegal structures, businesses and criminal activities".
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Original:  ZimRights director Munyaradzi Bidi told the IRIN news service: "About 200,000 people have been affected in the demolition drive - and many of them have papers to prove that they were legal occupants with lease agreements"
Revised:  ZimRights director Munyaradzi Bidi told the IRIN news service: "About 200,000 people have been affected in the demolition drive — and many of them have papers to prove that they were legal occupants with lease agreements"
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Original: June 2, 2005 Zimbabwe President Robert Mugabe 200,000 people living around Harare, Zimbabwe have been evicted from their homes, which have been targeted in a demolition programme by the government.
Revised:  Zimbabwe President Robert Mugabe 200,000 people living around Harare, Zimbabwe have been evicted from their homes, which have been targeted in a demolition programme by the government.
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Original: Image:Robert Mugabe.jpg|Zimbabwe President Robert Mugabe 200,000 people living around Harare, Zimbabwe have been evicted from their homes, which have been targeted in a demolition programme by the government.
Revised:  200,000 people living around Harare, Zimbabwe have been evicted from their homes, which have been targeted in a demolition programme by the government.
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Original: The releases came after the current regime under Soe Win dissolved the National Intelligence Bureau , run by Prime Minister General Khin Nyunt, who was ousted last month.
Revised: The releases came after the current regime under Soe Win dissolved the National Intelligence Bureau run by Prime Minister General Khin Nyunt, who was ousted last month.
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Original:  Barberi committed statutory rape of the young girl from the time she was 11 until she was 15, but could not be charged for his rape of the girl while she was 11 due to a statute of limitations.
Revised:  Barberi allegedly committed statutory rape of the young girl from the time she was 11 until she was 15, but could not be charged for his rape of the girl while she was 11 due to a statute of limitations.
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Original:  Barberi committed statutory rape of the young girl from the time she was 11 until she was 15, but could not be charged for his rape of the girl while she was 11 due to a statute of limitations.
Revised:  Barberi committed statutory rape of the young girl from the time she was 11 until she was 15, but could not be charged for his rape of the girl when she was 11 due to a statute of limitations.
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Original:  If the statue had not applied then Barberi would have faced a life sentence.
Revised:  If the statute had not applied then Barberi would have faced a life sentence.
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Original:  He has been given a bad-conduct discharge from the U.S. Army.
Revised:  He has been given a bad-conduct discharge from the United States Army.
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Original:  The girl said that Barberi told her "That ’ s what little girls do."
Revised:  The girl said that Barberi told her "That ' s what little girls do."
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Original:  During this case the defense brought forward a 30 year old woman who had recanted her charge of sexual abuse by Barberi, attempting to further their case that the young girl was lying.
Revised:  During this case the defense brought forward a 30-year-old woman as a witness, who testified that the young girl was lying.
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Original:  Jacqueline Tubbs cross examined the woman, referencing her sworn statement to CID . That statement regarded the young girl's comments to the woman: "What she said was, 'You know he did this to you, too'" 
Revised:  Jacqueline Tubbs cross examined the woman, and got her to admit she had lied a to CID investigation . That statement regarded the young girl's comments to the woman: "What she said was, 'You know he did this to you, too'" 
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Original:  Staff Sgt.
Revised: Seal of the United States Department of the Army Staff Sgt.
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Original:  Jacqueline Tubbs cross examined the woman, and got her to admit she had lied a to CID investigation .
Revised:  Jacqueline Tubbs cross examined the woman, and got her to admit she had lied a to CID investigator .
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Original:  The driver was taken to Brantford General Hospital for treatment of Anaphylaxis , reportedly caused by a peanut allergy.
Revised:  The driver was taken to Brantford General Hospital for treatment of anaphylaxis , reportedly caused by a peanut allergy.
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Original:   In a Press Release, the FDIC attempted to reassure customers by saying that "insured depositors and borrowers will automatically become customers of IndyMac Federal, FSB and will continue to have uninterrupted customer service and access to their funds by ATM, debit cards and writing checks in the same manner as before.  
Revised:  In a Press Release, the FDIC attempted to reassure customers by saying that "insured depositors and borrowers will automatically become customers of IndyMac Federal, FSB and will continue to have uninterrupted customer service and access to their funds by ATM, debit cards and writing checks in the same manner as before. " 
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Original: The logo of IndyMac BankIn what regulators have described as the second-largest bank failure in the history of the United States, IndyMac Bank has been seized by Federal Deposit Insurance Corporation (FDIC) due to plummeting shares and the start of a run on the bank.
Revised: The logo of IndyMac Bank In what regulators have described as the second-largest bank failure in the history of the United States, IndyMac Bank has been seized by Federal Deposit Insurance Corporation (FDIC) due to plummeting shares and the start of a run on the bank.
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Original:  The FDIC has said that it will transfer alll insured deposits and substantial assets, to the new IndyMac Federal Bank , which as the name implies, is controlled by an agency of the federal government.
Revised:  The FDIC has said that it will transfer all insured deposits and substantial assets, to the new IndyMac Federal Bank , which as the name implies, is controlled by an agency of the federal government.
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Original:  The FDIC has said that it will transfer alll insured deposits and substantial assets, to the new IndyMac Federal Bank , which as the name implies, is controlled by an agency of the federal government.
Revised:  The FDIC has said that it will transfer alll insured deposits and substantial assets, to the new IndyMac Federal Bank which, as the name implies, is controlled by an agency of the federal government.
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Original:  The transfer aims to be completed by Monday.
Revised:  The aim is forthe transfer to be completed by Monday.
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Original:  The logo of the FDICIn a Press Release , the FDIC attempted to reassure customers by saying that  "insured depositors and borrowers will automatically become customers of IndyMac Federal, FSB and will continue to have uninterrupted customer service and access to their funds by ATM, debit cards and writing checks in the same manner as before."
Revised:  The logo of the FDIC In a press release , the FDIC attempted to reassure customers by saying that "insured depositors and borrowers will automatically become customers of IndyMac Federal, FSB and will continue to have uninterrupted customer service and access to their funds by ATM, debit cards and writing checks in the same manner as before."
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Original:  The logo of the FDICIn a Press Release , the FDIC attempted to reassure customers by saying that  "insured depositors and borrowers will automatically become customers of IndyMac Federal, FSB and will continue to have uninterrupted customer service and access to their funds by ATM, debit cards and writing checks in the same manner as before."
Revised:  The logo of the FDICIn a Press Release , the FDIC attempted to reassure customers by saying that , "insured depositors and borrowers will automatically become customers of IndyMac Federal, FSB and will continue to have uninterrupted customer service and access to their funds by ATM, debit cards and writing checks in the same manner as before."
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Original:  Over the last few days, marked annalists have predicted the failure of IndyMac due to the fact that it was shedding jobs and closing many of its banks
Revised:  Over the last few days, marked analists have predicted the failure of IndyMac due to the fact that it was shedding jobs and closing many of its banks
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Original:  Over the last few days, marked analysts have predicted the failure of IndyMac due to the fact that it was shedding jobs and closing many of its banks
Revised:  Over the last few days, marked analysts have predicted the failure of IndyMac due to the fact that it was shedding jobs and closing many of its branch offices
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Original: The logo of IndyMac Bank In what regulators have described as the second-largest bank failure in the history of the United States, IndyMac Bank has been closed by the w: Office of Thrift Supervision and placed under the conservatorship of the Federal Deposit Insurance Corporation (FDIC) due to plummeting shares and the start of a run on the bank.
Revised: The logo of IndyMac Bank In what regulators have described as the second-largest bank failure in the history of the United States, IndyMac Bank has been closed by the Office of Thrift Supervision and placed under the conservatorship of the Federal Deposit Insurance Corporation (FDIC) due to plummeting shares and the start of a run on the bank.
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Original: 200px|Tony Snow in May 2006, during his first White House press conference Tony Snow, former White House Press Secretary for American President George W. Bush and the first anchor of Fox News Sunday, has died today from cancer at the age of 53.
Revised: 200px|Tony Snow in May 2006, during his first White House press conference Tony Snow, former White House Press Secretary for American President George W. Bush and the first anchor of Fox News Sunday, has died from cancer at the age of 53.
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Original:  It is not yet clear what caused the bus to swerve off the road, but as the crash occured at 6:30 a.m. local time the driver may have fallen asleep at the wheel  
Revised:  It is not yet clear what caused the bus to swerve off the road, but as the crash occured at 6:30 a.m. local time the driver may have fallen asleep at the wheel . 
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Original:  Regardless, the bus has been removed wuth a crane and subjected to a technical examination by police    
Revised:  Regardless, the bus has been removed wuth a crane and subjected to a technical examination by police . 
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Original:  All the victims are passengers, as the owner of the vehicle's operater Moana, Josef Rzepka, said both of the drivers on board escaped unhurt.
Revised:  All the victims are passengers, as the owner of the vehicle's operator Moana, Josef Rzepka, said both of the drivers on board escaped unhurt.
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Original:  It is not yet clear what caused the bus to swerve off the road, but as the crash occured at 6:30 a.m. local time the driver may have fallen asleep at the wheel.
Revised:  It is not yet clear what caused the bus to swerve off the road, but as the crash occurred at 6:30 a.m. local time the driver may have fallen asleep at the wheel.
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Original:  Regardless, the bus has been removed wuth a crane and subjected to a technical examination by police.
Revised:  Regardless, the bus has been removed with a crane and subjected to a technical examination by police.
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Original: Bobby Mercer of the old New York Yankees has died today.
Revised: Bobby Murcer of the old New York Yankees has died today.
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Original:  Thermond Munson's wife recieved Murcer 's bat.
Revised:  Thurmond Munson's wife recieved Murcer 's bat.
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Original:  Thermond Munson's wife recieved Murcer 's bat.
Revised:  Thermond Munson's wife received Mercer 's bat.
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Original:  He leaves behind his wife, 2 kids Tori and Todd  and his grandchildren.
Revised:  He leaves behind his wife, 2 kids Tori and Todd , and his grandchildren.
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Original:  He recieved news that he had a brain tumor on Christmas Eve 2006.
Revised:  He received news that he had a brain tumor on Christmas Eve 2006.
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Original:  He recieved news that he had a brain tumor on Christmas Eve 2006.
Revised:  He recieved news that he had a brain tumour on Christmas Eve 2006.
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Original:  Commisherner Bud Selig of the MLB said he will be very much missed and due to the fact that the all-star game is coming up he will be missed dearly.
Revised:  Commissioner Bud Selig of the MLB said he will be very much missed and due to the fact that the all-star game is coming up he will be missed dearly.
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Original:  He said he won the game for Thurmon Munson when he hit a 3 run homerun and a two run single in the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles . UR
Revised:  He said he won the game for Munson when he hit a 3 run homerun and a two run single in the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles . UR
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Original:  He said he won the game for Thurmon Munson when he hit a 3 run homerun and a two run single in the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles . UR
Revised:  He said he won the game for Thurmon Munson when he hit a 3 run home run and a two run single in the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles . UR
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Original:  He said he won the game for Thurmon Munson when he hit a 3 run homerun and a two run single in the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles . UR
Revised:  He said he won the game for Thurmon Munson when he hit a 3 run homerun and a two run single in the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles UR
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Original:  He said he won the game for Thurmon Munson when he hit a 3 run homerun and a two run single in the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles . UR
Revised:  He said he won the game for Thurmon Munson when he hit a 3 run homerun and a two run single in the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles . 
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Original:   Yankees owner George Steinbrenner said Bobby was a great guy  .
Revised:  Yankees owner George Steinbrenner stated that " Bobby was a great guy .
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Original:   Yankees owner George Steinbrenner said Bobby was a great guy  .
Revised:  Yankees owner George Steinbrenner said Bobby was a great guy " .
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Original:  Thurmond Munson's wifereceived Mercer 's bat.
Revised:  He leaves behind his wife, 2 children Tori and Todd, as well as grandchildren. Commissioner Bud Selig of the MLB said, "All of Major League Baseball is saddened today by the passing of Bobby Murcer, particularly on the eve of this historic All-Star game at Yankee Stadium, a place he called home for so many years."
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Original:  He said he won the game for Munson when he hit a 3 run home run and a two run single in the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles
Revised:  He said he won the game for Munson when he hit a 3 run home run and then a two-run single at the bottom of the ninth to beat the Baltimore Orioles
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Original:  After hitting a three-run home run and then a two-run single at the bottom of the ninth inning to beat Baltimore 5-4, Murcer won the game for Munson, and gave his bat to Munson's widow  
Revised:  After hitting a three-run home run and then a two-run single at the bottom of the ninth inning to beat Baltimore 5-4, Murcer won the game for Munson, and gave his bat to Munson's widow . 
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Original:  After hitting a three-run home run and then a two-run single at the bottom of the ninth inning to beat Baltimore 5-4, Murcer won the game for Munson, and gave his bat to Munson's widow . Bobby Cox gave sympathy for Murcer
Revised:  After hitting a three-run home run and then a two-run single at the bottom of the ninth inning to beat Baltimore 5-4, Murcer won the game for Munson, and gave his bat to Munson's widow Bobby Cox gave sympathy for Murcer
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Original:  After hitting a three-run home run and then a two-run single at the bottom of the ninth inning to beat Baltimore 5-4, Murcer won the game for Munson, and gave his bat to Munson's widow . Bobby Cox gave sympathy for Murcer
Revised:  After hitting a three-run home run and then a two-run single at the bottom of the ninth inning to beat Baltimore 5-4, Murcer won the game for Munson, and gave his bat to Munson's widow . 
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Original:  They recieved care from the Brooke Army Medical Center in Fort Sam Antonio.
Revised:  They received care from the Brooke Army Medical Center in Fort Sam Antonio.
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Original:  The men worked at Northrop Grumman Corportation. URL UR
Revised:  The men worked at Northrop Grumman URL UR
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Original:  They were being held for more than 5 years.
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Original:  They held the men when their drug servailance plane went down in the jungles of Columbia in 2003.
Revised:  They held the men when their drug surveillance plane went down in the jungles of Columbia in 2003.
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Original:  They received care from the Brooke Army Medical Center in Fort Sam Antonio before being sent home to their families.
Revised:  They received care from the Brooke Army Medical Center in San Antonio before being sent home to their families.
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Original:  The men were taken captive when their drug surveillance plane went down in the jungles of Columbia in 2003  more than 5 years ago.
Revised:  The men were taken captive when their drug surveillance plane went down in the jungles of Colombia in 2003 more than 5 years ago.
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Original:  The men were taken captive when their drug surveillance plane went down in the jungles of Columbia in 2003  more than 5 years ago.
Revised:  The men were taken captive when their drug surveillance plane went down in the jungles of Columbia in 2003 - more than 5 years ago.
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Original:   Stansell emphasized that while he was grateful to be home, no one should "forget the people that are still there".
Revised:  Keith Stansell emphasized that while he was grateful to be home, no one should "forget the people that are still there".
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Original:  He reminded those listening that some of the current hostages have already been in captivity for 10 years, in squalid conditions.
Revised:  He reminded those listening that some of the remaining hostages have already been in captivity for 10 years, in squalid conditions.
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Original:  All 3 of the men were working for a subsidiary of Northrop Grumman Corporation at the time.
Revised:  All three of the men were working for a subsidiary of Northrop Grumman Corporation at the time.
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Original:  According to the Pakistan Television Corporation, hundreds of militants stormed a convey of Pakistani paramilitary forces.
Revised:  According to the Pakistan Television Corporation, hundreds of militants stormed a convoy of Pakistani paramilitary forces.
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Original:  This comes one day after militants took 29 security personal hostage, threatening to kill them if seven of their allies were not released from jail  
Revised:  This comes one day after militants took 29 security personal hostage, threatening to kill them if seven of their allies were not released from jail . 
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Original: At least 16 soldiers and militants - possibly more - were killed in Pakistan Saturday during an ambush by the Taliban.
Revised: At least 16 soldiers - possibly more - were killed in Pakistan Saturday during an ambush by the Taliban.
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Original: At least 16 soldiers - possibly more - were killed in Pakistan Saturday during an ambush by the Taliban.
Revised: At least 16 soldiers - were killed in Pakistan Saturday during an ambush by the Taliban.
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Original:  This comes one day after militants took 29 security personal hostage, threatening to kill them if seven of their allies were not released from jail .
Revised:  This comes one day after militants took 29 security personal hostage, threatening to kill them if seven of their allies were not released from prison .
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Original:  The Jerusalem Post reports that the Israeli Air Force is practising in Iraq.
Revised:  The Jerusalem Post , the Israeli Air Force is practising in Iraq.
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Original:  The Jerusalem Post reports that the Israeli Air Force is practising in Iraq.
Revised:  The Jerusalem Post reports that the Israeli Air Force (IAF) has been training personnel and allegedly performing military exercises in Iraq.
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Original:  The belief is that Israel is preparing to attack Iranian nuclear reactors.
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Original:     Related stories Iran tests more missiles as war games continu
Revised:  The official stated that Israeli planes would fly in from Jordan during the dead of night and land near the Iraqi city of Hadita reportedly at a U.S. landing strip. The official also stated that Israeli planes were also detected at other bases in Iraq and that those strips were being prepared as places to launch an attack on Iran. Related stories Iran tests more missiles as war games continu
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Original:     Related stories Iran tests more missiles as war games continu
Revised:  The Israeli Defense Force also denied the allegations saying they were "baseless." Related stories Iran tests more missiles as war games continu
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Original:  "I find that report inconceivable and clearly someone is either misinformed or intentionally trying to create mischief," stated Bryan Whitman, a spokesman for the The Pentagon.
Revised:  "I find that report inconceivable and clearly someone is either misinformed or intentionally trying to create mischief," stated Bryan Whitman, a spokesman for The Pentagon.
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Original:  On July 11, an unnamed Israeli Defense official told local news outlets in the country that the IAF was performing military exercises in Iraq and was using American military bases for places to land.
Revised:  On July 11, an unnamed Iraqi sources told local news outlets in the country that the IAF was performing military exercises in Iraq and was using American military bases for places to land.
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Original:  On July 11, an unnamed Israeli Defense official told local news outlets in the country that the IAF was performing military exercises in Iraq and was using American military bases for places to land.
Revised:  On July 11, an unnamed Israeli Defense official told local news outlets in the country that the IAF was performing military exercises in the country and was using American military bases for places to land.
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Original:  The alleged exercise, claimed the official , was an exercise aimed at preparing an attack on Iran.
Revised:  The alleged exercise, claimed the sources , was an exercise aimed at preparing an attack on Iran.
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