wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Etymology The sāmaṇera is a Pali language diminutive of the Sanskrit term śrāmaṇa "strenuous" , which indicates an ascetic practitioner.
Revised: Etymology The sāmaṇera is a Pali language diminutive of the Sanskrit term śrāmaṇera , which indicates an ascetic practitioner.
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Original:  The prātimokṣa rules do not apply to them and they do not take part in the recital of the rules on uposatha days.
Revised:  The pratimokṣa rules do not apply to them and they do not take part in the recital of the rules on uposatha days.
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Original:  Sāmaṇeras (and sāmaṇerīs – the equivalent term for girls) keep the Ten Precepts as their code of behaviour and devote themselves to the religious life during breaks from secular schooling, or in conjunction with it if devoted to formal ordination.
Revised:  Sāmaṇeras (and sāmaṇerīs – the equivalent term for girls) keep the Ten Preceepts as their code of behaviour and devote themselves to the religious life during breaks from secular schooling, or in conjunction with it if devoted to formal ordination.
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Original:  Adults would normally wear the white robes of a Brahmin.
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Original:  Sanskrit śrāmaṇera , is a novice male monastic in a Buddhist context.
Revised:  () , is a novice male monastic in a Buddhist context.
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Original: Certain hospitals, such as Johns Hopkins , maintain mixed units consisting of both Acute care units for the critically ill, and intermediate care units for patients who are not critical.
Revised: Certain hospitals, such as Johns Hopkins , maintain mixed units consisting of both acute care units for the critically ill, and intermediate care units for patients who are not critical.
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Original:  Acute coronary care Acute coronary care units ( ACCU ), also called "critical coronary care units" ( CCCU)is equivalent to intensive care in the level of service provided.
Revised:  Acute coronary care Acute coronary care units ( ACCUs ), also called "critical coronary care units" ( CCCU)is equivalent to intensive care in the level of service provided.
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Original:  Acute coronary care Acute coronary care units ( ACCU ), also called "critical coronary care units" ( CCCU)is equivalent to intensive care in the level of service provided.
Revised:  Acute coronary care Acute coronary care units ( ACCU ), also called "critical coronary care units" ( CCCUs), are equivalent to intensive care in the level of service provided.
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Original:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCU ), also called Progressive care units ( PCU), Intermediate coronary care units ( ICCU ), or stepdown units, and provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
Revised:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCUs ), also called Progressive care units ( PCU), Intermediate coronary care units ( ICCU ), or stepdown units, and provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
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Original:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCU ), also called Progressive care units ( PCU), Intermediate coronary care units ( ICCU ), or stepdown units, and provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
Revised:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCU ), also called progressive care units ( PCU), Intermediate coronary care units ( ICCU ), or stepdown units, and provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
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Original:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCU ), also called Progressive care units ( PCU), Intermediate coronary care units ( ICCU ), or stepdown units, and provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
Revised:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCU ), also called Progressive care units ( PCUs), intermediate coronary care units ( ICCU ), or stepdown units, and provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
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Original:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCU ), also called Progressive care units ( PCU), Intermediate coronary care units ( ICCU ), or stepdown units, and provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
Revised:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCU ), also called Progressive care units ( PCU), Intermediate coronary care units ( ICCUs ), or stepdown units, and provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
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Original:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCU ), also called Progressive care units ( PCU), Intermediate coronary care units ( ICCU ), or stepdown units, and provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
Revised:  Subacute coronary care Subacute coronary care units ( SCCU ), also called Progressive care units ( PCU), Intermediate coronary care units ( ICCU ), or stepdown units, provide a level of care intermediate to that of the intensive care unit and that of the general medical floor.
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Original:  These units typically serve patients who require cardiac telemetry  such as those with unstable angina.
Revised:  These units typically serve patients who require cardiac telemetry , such as those with unstable angina.
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Original:  This would last until World War I. Arabia before World War I 1914 Administrative divisions   Sanjaks of the vilayet: Amara Sanjak Basra Sanjak Diwanniyya Sanjak Muntafiq Sanjak Najd Sanjak;
Revised:  This would last until World War I. Administrative divisions Sanjaks of the vilayet: Amara Sanjak Basra Sanjak Diwanniyya Sanjak Muntafiq Sanjak Najd Sanjak;
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Original:  Specifically, clinical characteristics such as allergy and bronchial hyperresponsiveness that are commonly observed in individuals afflicted with asthma were viewed as likely determinants of the life-threatening disease, COPD (in the Netherlands, the term chronic non-specific lung disease was adopted as an umbrella term for asthma and COPD). 
Revised:  Specifically, clinical characteristics such as allergy and bronchial hyperresponsiveness that are commonly observed in individuals afflicted with asthma were viewed as likely determinants of the life-threatening disease, COPD (in the Netherlands, the term chronic non-specific lung disease was adopted as an umbrella term for asthma and COPD). </ref>
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Original: HIV infection rates The HIV virus affects the human immune system and, if left untreated can eventually lead to Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome (AIDS).
Revised:  The HIV virus affects the human immune system and, if left untreated can eventually lead to Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome (AIDS).
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Original: HIV infection rates The HIV virus affects the human immune system and, if left untreated can eventually lead to Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome (AIDS).
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Original:  List of estimated HIV prevalence among MSM by country Disclaimer: estimated HIV rates can be inaccurate.
Revised:  List of estimated HIV infection rates by country Disclaimer: estimated HIV rates can be inaccurate.
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Original: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2         
Revised: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2 HIV infection rates in the U.S. 
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Original: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2         
Revised: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2 The HIV virus affects the human immune system and, if left untreated can eventually lead to Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome (AIDS). 
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Original: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2         
Revised: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2 The CDC reported that in 2009 that male-to-male sex (MSM) accounted for 61\% of all new HIV infections in the U.S. and that those who had a history of recreational drug injection accounted for an additional 3\% of new infections. Among the approximately 784,701 people living with an HIV diagnosis, 396,810 (51\%) were MSM. About 48\% of MSM living with an HIV diagnosis were white, 30\% were black, and 19\% were Hispanic or Latino. Although the majority of MSM are white, non-whites accounted for 54\% of new infections HIV related MSM infections in 2008. 
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Original: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2         
Revised: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2 In 2010 the CDC reported that MSM represented approximately 4 percent of the male population in the United States but male-to-male sex accounted for 78 percent of new HIV infections among men and 63 percent of all new infections. Men overall accounted for 76\% of all adults and adolescents living with HIV infection at the end of 2010 in the United States, and 80\% (38,000) of the estimated 47,500 new HIV infections. 69\% of men living with HIV were gay, bisexual, and other men who have sex with men. 39\% (14,700) of new HIV infections in US men were in blacks, 35\% (13,200) were in whites, and 22\% (8,500) were in Hispanics/Latinos. The rate of estimated new HIV infections among black men (per 100,000) was 103.6—six and a half times that of white men (15.8) and more than twice the rate among Hispanic/Latino men (45.5) as of 2010. 
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Original: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2         
Revised: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2 The CDC (2015) reported that gay and bisexual men accounted for 82\% (26,375 out of 1,242,000 adults and adolescents) of HIV diagnoses among males and 67\% of all diagnoses in the United States, while six percent (2,392) of HIV diagnoses were attributed to injection drug use (IDU) and another 3\% (1,202) to male-to-male sexual contact plus IDU. Heterosexual contact accounted for 24\% (9,339) of all HIV diagnoses. 
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Original: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2         
Revised: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2 Among all gay and bisexual men with HIV infection classified as AIDS in the United States in 2015, African Americans accounted for the highest number (3,928; 39\%), followed by whites (3,096; 31\%) and Hispanics/Latinos (2,430; 24\%). At the end of 2014, 508,676 gay and bisexual men were living with diagnosed HIV infection (53\% of everyone living with diagnosed HIV in the US). Of gay and bisexual men living with diagnosed HIV, 157,758 (31\%) were African American, 212,558 (42\%) were white, and 109,857 (22\%) were Hispanic/Latino. From 2005 to 2014 diagnoses among African American gay and bisexual men increased 22\% but has increased less than 1\% between 2010 and 2014. HIV diagnoses among African American gay and bisexual men aged 13 to 24 increased 87\% between 2005 and 2014, but with diagnoses declining 2\% between 2010 and 2014. 
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Original: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2         
Revised: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2 A 2010 study estimated that for every 100,000 MSM, 692 will be diagnosed with HIV. This makes MSM 60 times more likely to contract the virus than normal men and 54 times more likely than women.Purcell, D.W., C Johnson, A Lansky, J Prejean, R Stein, P Denning, Z Gaul, H Weinstock, J Su, 
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Original: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2         
Revised: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2 N Crepaz. Latebreaker #22896 Presented March 10, 2010. “Calculating HIV and Syphilis Rates for Risk Groups: Estimating the National Population Size of Men Who Have Sex with Men” 2010 National STD Prevention Conference; Atlanta, GA. 
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Original: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2         
Revised: 19.8 19.6 7.3 18.2 18.2 12.9 14.0 8.4 11.5 18 12.6 7.0 17.2 17.0 20.7 3.0 15.0 15.0 14.9 6.7 14.5 2.8 14.0 13.9 9.2 13.7 16.5 13.2 13.2 14.8 6.7 22.0 12.7 15.4 12.6 12.5 12.3 8.4 15.7 11.3 8.0 12.3 2.2 18.3 12.0 8.5 11.9 9.1 21.6 8.6 7.5 8.3 8.2 8.0 7.8 7.8 7.75 7.5 7.2 7.2 7.1 7.1 6.7 6.5 6.4 6.3 6.2 6.0 5.9 5.9 5.7 5.7 5.7 4.9 4.9 4.8 4.8 4.8 4.3 4.3 4.1 4.0 4.0 3.7 3.6 3.3 3.3 3.2 3.1 3.0 2.7 2.7 7.7 2.5 2.4 2.3 2.2 1.9 1.8 1.6 1.5 1.4 1.3 1.3 1.1 0.8 0.5 0.5 0.5 0.4 0.2 Since its height in 1993-1994 the death rate due to HIV has fallen more than 9 other leading causes of death, yet as of 2013 HIV continues to be one of the 10 leading causes of death among persons 25-44, especially among men, African Americans and in the South. Also as regards HIV relation to mortality, a study in the United Kingdom reported that in 2008 the overall mortality rate among the HIV-diagnosed population aged 15–59 years remained more than five times higher than that in the general population. However, as the study acknowledges data on the impact of HIV/AIDS on mortality among gay and bisexual men as well as among other populations, is very limited, and methods to use this are problematic.Wiley Online Library: Ten-year mortality trends among persons diagnosed with HIV infection in England and Wales in the era of antiretroviral therapy: AIDS remains a silent killer - Simmons - 2013 - HIV Medicine - Wiley Online Library, accessdate: April 2, 2017
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Original:  This makes MSM 60 times more likely to contract the virus than normal men and 54 times more likely than women.
Revised:  This makes MSM 60 times more likely to contract the virus than other men and 54 times more likely than women.
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Original:  CDC (1981, 5th June) 'Pheumocystis Pneumonia - Los Angeles', MMWR, Vol. 30. No. 21. URL A month later, The New York Times reported that 41 homosexuals had been diagnosed with Kaposi’s Sarcoma, and eight had died less than 24 months after the diagnosis was made.
Revised:  A month later, The New York Times reported that 41 homosexuals had been diagnosed with Kaposi’s Sarcoma, and eight had died less than 24 months after the diagnosis was made.
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Original:  The New York Times (1981, 3rd July) "Rare cancer seen in 41 homosexuals" URL By 1982, the condition was referred to in the medical community as Gay-related immune deficiency (GRID), "gay cancer," and "gay compromise syndrome.
Revised:  By 1982, the condition was referred to in the medical community as Gay-related immune deficiency (GRID), "gay cancer," and "gay compromise syndrome.
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Original: Wiley Online Library: Ten-year mortality trends among persons diagnosed with HIV infection in England and Wales in the era of antiretroviral therapy: AIDS remains a silent killer - Simmons - 2013 - HIV Medicine - Wiley Online Library, accessdate : April 2, 2017
Revised: Wiley Online Library: Ten-year mortality trends among persons diagnosed with HIV infection in England and Wales in the era of antiretroviral therapy: AIDS remains a silent killer - Simmons - 2013 - HIV Medicine - Wiley Online Library, access-date : April 2, 2017
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Original: Federal judicial service On November 14, 2012, President  Obama nominated Watson to serve as a United States District Judge for the United States District Court for the District of Hawaii, to the seat vacated by Judge David Alan Ezra, who took senior status on June 27, 2012.
Revised: Federal judicial service On November 14, 2012, President Barack Obama nominated Watson to serve as a United States District Judge for the United States District Court for the District of Hawaii, to the seat vacated by Judge David Alan Ezra, who took senior status on June 27, 2012.
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Original: From 1990 till 1992 Lyashko was correspondent and head of the newspaper "Young Guard" (based in Kiev ).
Revised: From 1990 till 1992 Lyashko was correspondent and head of the newspaper "Young Guard" (based in Kyiv ).
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Original:  On 9 December 1994 the Criminal College of the Kiev City Court found Lyashko guilty according to articles 86-1, 191, and 194 part 3 of the Criminal Code of Ukraine.
Revised:  On 9 December 1994 the Criminal College of the Kyiv City Court found Lyashko guilty according to articles 86-1, 191, and 194 part 3 of the Criminal Code of Ukraine.
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Original:  In 1999, the publication was closed by decision of the Moscow District Court in Kiev for "divulging state secrets".
Revised:  In 1999, the publication was closed by decision of the Moscow District Court in Kyiv for "divulging state secrets".
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