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Original:  The King received it the following day, The Times reporting: On 13 December 1922 Prime Minister Craig addressed the Parliament informing them that the King had responded to its address as follows: Governmental and constitutional structures %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% [[File:Saorstát Éireann.png|upright=0.
Revised:  The king received it the following day, The Times reporting: On 13 December 1922 Prime Minister Craig addressed the Parliament informing them that the King had responded to its address as follows: Governmental and constitutional structures %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% [[File:Saorstát Éireann.png|upright=0.
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Original:  The King received it the following day, The Times reporting: On 13 December 1922 Prime Minister Craig addressed the Parliament informing them that the King had responded to its address as follows: Governmental and constitutional structures %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% [[File:Saorstát Éireann.png|upright=0.
Revised:  The King received it the following day, The Times reporting: On 13 December 1922 Prime Minister Craig addressed the Parliament informing them that the king had responded to its address as follows: Governmental and constitutional structures %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% [[File:Saorstát Éireann.png|upright=0.
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Original:  The Treaty established that the new Irish Free State would be a constitutional monarchy, with the Governor-General of the Irish Free State as representative of the Crown.
Revised:  The Treaty established that the new state would be a constitutional monarchy, with the Governor-General of the Irish Free State as representative of the Crown.
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Original:  The Constitution of the Irish Free State made more detailed provision for the state's system of government, with a three-tier parliament, called the Oireachtas, made up of the King and two houses, Dáil Éireann and Seanad Éireann (the Irish Senate).
Revised:  The Constitution of the Irish Free State made more detailed provision for the state's system of government, with a three-tier parliament, called the Oireachtas, made up of the king and two houses, Dáil Éireann and Seanad Éireann (the Irish Senate).
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Original:  Executive authority was vested in the King , with the Governor-General as his representative.
Revised:  Executive authority was vested in the king , with the Governor-General as his representative.
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Original:  Governors-General were appointed by the King initially on the advice of the British Government, but with the consent of the Irish Government.
Revised:  Governors-General were appointed by the king initially on the advice of the British Government, but with the consent of the Irish Government.
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Original:  From 1927, the Irish Government alone had the power to advise the King whom to appoint.
Revised:  From 1927, the Irish Government alone had the power to advise the king whom to appoint.
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Original:  Secondly, it was to the King explicitly in his role as part of the Treaty settlement, not in terms of pre-1922 British rule.
Revised:  Secondly, it was to the king explicitly in his role as part of the Treaty settlement, not in terms of pre-1922 British rule.
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Original:  "Freedom to achieve freedom" %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% [[File:Irish Free State passport.jpg|upright=0.9|Irish Free State passport (holder's name removed)]] Governance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The following were the principal parties of government of the Irish Free State between 1922 and 1937: Cumann na nGaedheal under W. T. Cosgrave (1922–32) Fianna Fáil under Éamon de Valera (1932–37) Constitutional evolution %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% [[File:Stamp irl 1922 2N6se.jpg|upright=0.
Revised:  "Freedom to achieve freedom" %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% [[File:Irish Free State passport.jpg|upright=0.9|Irish Free State passport (holder's name removed)]] Governance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The following were the principal parties of government of the Free State between 1922 and 1937: Cumann na nGaedheal under W. T. Cosgrave (1922–32) Fianna Fáil under Éamon de Valera (1932–37) Constitutional evolution %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% [[File:Stamp irl 1922 2N6se.jpg|upright=0.
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Original:  The King remained king in Ireland;
Revised:  The king remained king in Ireland;
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Original:  Officially the representative of the King , the Governor-General also received instructions from the British Government on his use of the Royal Assent, namely a Bill passed by the Dáil and Seanad could be Granted Assent (signed into law), Withheld (not signed, pending later approval) or Denied (vetoed).
Revised:  Officially the representative of the king , the Governor-General also received instructions from the British Government on his use of the Royal Assent, namely a Bill passed by the Dáil and Seanad could be Granted Assent (signed into law), Withheld (not signed, pending later approval) or Denied (vetoed).
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Original:  Poster promoting Irish Free State farm goods for breakfast to Canadians ("Irish Free State butter, eggs and bacon for our breakfasts") As with the other dominions, the Irish Free State had a status of association with the UK rather than being completely legally independent from it.
Revised:  Poster promoting Irish Free State farm goods for breakfast to Canadians ("Irish Free State butter, eggs and bacon for our breakfasts") As with the other dominions, the Free State had a status of association with the UK rather than being completely legally independent from it.
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Original:  The Conference also led to a reform of the King 's title, given effect by the Royal and Parliamentary Titles Act 1927, which changed the King 's royal title so that it took account of the fact that there was no longer a United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland.
Revised:  The Conference also led to a reform of the king 's title, given effect by the Royal and Parliamentary Titles Act 1927, which changed the King 's royal title so that it took account of the fact that there was no longer a United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland.
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Original:  The Conference also led to a reform of the King 's title, given effect by the Royal and Parliamentary Titles Act 1927, which changed the King 's royal title so that it took account of the fact that there was no longer a United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland.
Revised:  The Conference also led to a reform of the King 's title, given effect by the Royal and Parliamentary Titles Act 1927, which changed the king 's royal title so that it took account of the fact that there was no longer a United Kingdom of Great Britain and Ireland.
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Original:  The King adopted the following style by which he would be known in all of his Empire: By the Grace of God, of Great Britain, Ireland and the British Dominions beyond the Seas King, Defender of the Faith, Emperor of India.
Revised:  The king adopted the following style by which he would be known in all of his Empire: By the Grace of God, of Great Britain, Ireland and the British Dominions beyond the Seas King, Defender of the Faith, Emperor of India.
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Original:  That was the King 's title in Ireland just as elsewhere in his Empire.
Revised:  That was the king 's title in Ireland just as elsewhere in his Empire.
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Original:  The King was never simply the "King of Ireland" or the "King of the Irish Free State".
Revised:  The king was never simply the "King of Ireland" or the "King of the Irish Free State".
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Original:  In the conduct of external relations, the Irish Free State tried to push the boundaries of its status as a Dominion.
Revised:  In the conduct of external relations, the Free State tried to push the boundaries of its status as a Dominion.
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Original:  Entitlement of citizenship of the Irish Free State was defined in the Irish Free State Constitution, but the status of that citizenship was contentious.
Revised:  Entitlement of citizenship of the Free State was defined in the Irish Free State Constitution, but the status of that citizenship was contentious.
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Original:  One of the first projects of the Irish Free State was the design and production of the Great Seal of Saorstát Éireann which was carried out on behalf of the Government by Hugh Kennedy.
Revised:  One of the first projects of the Free State was the design and production of the Great Seal of Saorstát Éireann which was carried out on behalf of the Government by Hugh Kennedy.
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Original:  This change made the dominions, including the Irish Free State, de jure sovereign nations – fulfilling Collins' vision of having "the freedom to achieve freedom".
Revised:  This change made the dominions, including the Free State, de jure sovereign nations – fulfilling Collins' vision of having "the freedom to achieve freedom".
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Original:  The Free State symbolically marked these changes in two mould-breaking moves soon after winning internationally recognised independence: It sought, and got, the King 's acceptance to have an Irish minister, to the complete exclusion of British ministers, formally advise the King in the exercise of his powers and functions as King in the Irish Free State.
Revised:  The Free State symbolically marked these changes in two mould-breaking moves soon after winning internationally recognised independence: It sought, and got, the king 's acceptance to have an Irish minister, to the complete exclusion of British ministers, formally advise the King in the exercise of his powers and functions as King in the Irish Free State.
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Original:  The Free State symbolically marked these changes in two mould-breaking moves soon after winning internationally recognised independence: It sought, and got, the King 's acceptance to have an Irish minister, to the complete exclusion of British ministers, formally advise the King in the exercise of his powers and functions as King in the Irish Free State.
Revised:  The Free State symbolically marked these changes in two mould-breaking moves soon after winning internationally recognised independence: It sought, and got, the King 's acceptance to have an Irish minister, to the complete exclusion of British ministers, formally advise the king in the exercise of his powers and functions as King in the Irish Free State.
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Original:  The Free State symbolically marked these changes in two mould-breaking moves soon after winning internationally recognised independence: It sought, and got, the King 's acceptance to have an Irish minister, to the complete exclusion of British ministers, formally advise the King in the exercise of his powers and functions as King in the Irish Free State.
Revised:  The Free State symbolically marked these changes in two mould-breaking moves soon after winning internationally recognised independence: It sought, and got, the King 's acceptance to have an Irish minister, to the complete exclusion of British ministers, formally advise the King in the exercise of his powers and functions as king in the Irish Free State.
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Original:  This gave the President of the Executive Council the right to directly advise the King in his capacity as His Majesty's Irish Prime Minister.
Revised:  This gave the President of the Executive Council the right to directly advise the king in his capacity as His Majesty's Irish Prime Minister.
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Original:  The unprecedented replacement of the use of the Great Seal of the Realm and its replacement by the Great Seal of Saorstát Éireann, which the King awarded to the Irish Free State in 1931. (The Irish Seal consisted of a picture of King George V enthroned on one side, with the Irish state harp and the words Saorstát Éireann on the reverse.
Revised:  The unprecedented replacement of the use of the Great Seal of the Realm and its replacement by the Great Seal of Saorstát Éireann, which the king awarded to the Irish Free State in 1931. (The Irish Seal consisted of a picture of King George V enthroned on one side, with the Irish state harp and the words Saorstát Éireann on the reverse.
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Original:  One major policy error occurred in 1936 when he attempted to use the abdication of King Edward VIII to abolish the Crown and Governor-General in the Irish Free State with the "Constitution (Amendment No. 27) Act".
Revised:  One major policy error occurred in 1936 when he attempted to use the abdication of King Edward VIII to abolish the crown and governor-general in the Free State with the "Constitution (Amendment No. 27) Act".
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Original:  He was advised by senior law officers and other constitutional experts that, as the Crown and Governor-Generalship existed separately from the constitution in a vast number of acts, charters, orders-in-council, and letters patent, they both still existed.
Revised:  He was advised by senior law officers and other constitutional experts that, as the crown and governor-generalship existed separately from the constitution in a vast number of acts, charters, orders-in-council, and letters patent, they both still existed.
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Original:  In 1937, when the Irish Free State was superseded by Ireland (Éire), the pound became known as the "Irish pound" and the coins were marked Éire.
Revised:  In 1937, when the Free State was superseded by Ireland (Éire), the pound became known as the "Irish pound" and the coins were marked Éire.
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Original:  Demographics %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% According to one report, in 1924, shortly after the Irish Free State's establishment, the new dominion had the "lowest birth-rate in the world".
Revised:  Demographics %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% According to one report, in 1924, shortly after the Free State's establishment, the new dominion had the "lowest birth-rate in the world".
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Original:  A small but significant minority of Irish people, usually attached to parties like Sinn Féin and the smaller Republican Sinn Féin, denied the right of the twenty-six county state to use the name Ireland and continued to refer to the state as the Irish Free State .
Revised:  A small but significant minority of Irish people, usually attached to parties like Sinn Féin and the smaller Republican Sinn Féin, denied the right of the twenty-six county state to use the name Ireland and continued to refer to the state as "the Free State" .
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Original:  After the setting up of the Irish Free State in 1923, unionism in the south largely came to an end.
Revised:  After the setting up of the Free State in 1923, unionism in the south largely came to an end.
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Original:  The Free State came to an end with the coming into force of a new constitution on 29 December 1937 when the state took the name "Ireland".
Revised:  The Free State came to an end with the coming into force of the new constitution on 29 December 1937 when the state took the name "Ireland".
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Original: Although 'a new departure', and notably indirect in its reference to the monarchy, it was criticised by nationalists and republicans for making any reference to the Crown, the claim being that it was a direct oath to the Crown, a fact demonstrably incorrect by an examination of its wording, but in 1922 Ireland and beyond, it was the perception, not the reality, that influenced public debate on the issue.
Revised: Although 'a new departure', and notably indirect in its reference to the monarchy, it was criticised by nationalists and republicans for making any reference to the Crown, the claim being that it was a direct oath to the Crown, a fact arguably incorrect by an examination of its wording, but in 1922 Ireland and beyond, it was the perception, not the reality, that influenced public debate on the issue.
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Original:  Had its original author, Michael Collins, survived, he might have been able to argue that this had to be a step towards real independence, but with his assassination in August 1922, no major negotiator to the Oath's creation on the Irish side was still alive, available or pro-Treaty (the leader of the Irish delegation, Arthur Griffith, had also died in August 1922).
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Original:  He was earlier the Chief Commissioner, Right to Public Service Commission, West Bengal;
Revised:  He worked as the Chief Commissioner, Right to Public Service Commission, West Bengal;
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Original: Dr. Arup Roy Choudhury is working as Professor of Practice at Indian Institute of Technology, Delhi.
Revised: Prof. (Dr.) Arup Roy Choudhury is working as Professor of Practice at Indian Institute of Technology, Delhi.
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Original:  He worked as the Chairman & MD of NBCC (National Building Construction Company ), a Navaratna Central Public Sector Company from 3rd April 2001 to 31st August 2010 and as Chairman and MD of NTPC (National Thermal Power Company) a Maharatna Central Public Sector Company from 1st September 2010 till 31st August 2015.
Revised:  He worked as the Chairman & MD of NBCC (National Building Construction Corporation ), a Navaratna Central Public Sector Company from 3rd April 2001 to 31st August 2010 and as Chairman and MD of NTPC (National Thermal Power Company) a Maharatna Central Public Sector Company from 1st September 2010 till 31st August 2015.
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Original:  He also held as additional charge of Chairman 's DVC (Damodar Valley Corporation) a Company owned by Govt. of India, Govt. of West Bengal and Govt. of Jharkhand.
Revised:  He also held as additional charge of Chairman DVC (Damodar Valley Corporation) a Company owned by Govt. of India, Govt. of West Bengal and Govt. of Jharkhand.
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Original:  Since 28th Jan 2021 he has joined as Professor of Practice with the Indian Institute of Technology, IIT Delhi.
Revised:  Since 28th Jan 2021 he has joined as Professor of Practice with the Indian Institute of Technology, Delhi.
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Original:  D from IIT Delhi in Project management , with a special emphasis is to Dispute Resolution.
Revised:  D from IIT Delhi in Project Management , with a special emphasis is to Dispute Resolution.
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Original:  He scripted a stunning turnaround story as CMD by transforming NBCC, which was a sick company with negative net-worth and salary backlog in 2001, into a blue-chip dividend paying enterprise having 'Schedule A’ status.
Revised:  He scripted a stunning turnaround story by transforming NBCC, which was a sick company with negative net-worth and salary backlog in 2001, into a blue-chip dividend paying enterprise having 'Schedule A’ status.
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Original:  • Honoured with “Eminent Engineer Award” by Institution of Engineers (I) for remarkable and valuable contribution, both national and international, in the field of engineering, particularly in civil engineering and construction sector, received with the “Outstanding Engineer Award”  from The Institution of Engineering and Technology (IET) UK, for life-long contribution to “Excellence in Project Management in India”.
Revised:  • Honoured with “Eminent Engineer Award” by Institution of Engineers (I) for remarkable and valuable contribution, both national and international, in the field of engineering, particularly in civil engineering and construction sector, received with the “Outstanding Engineer Award” ' from The Institution of Engineering and Technology (IET) UK, for life-long contribution to “Excellence in Project Management in India”.
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Original:  • Elected Chairman of Standing Conference of Public Enterprises, the apex body of over 240 Central Public Sector Enterprises in India, for two consequtive terms, during which he effectively led policy advocacy for greater empowerment of these enterprises.
Revised:  • Elected Chairman of Standing Conference of Public Enterprises, the apex body of over 240 Central Public Sector Enterprises in India, for two consecutive terms, during which he effectively led policy advocacy for greater empowerment of these enterprises.
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Original:  • Was able to implement a total paradigm shift in NTPC which was till then a behemoth moving at a slow space to make it into one of the ten largest power companies in the world.
Revised:  • Was able to implement a total paradigm shift in NTPC which till then was a behemoth moving at a slow space to make it into one of the ten largest power companies in the world.
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Original:  Under his leadership NTPC added over 15,000 MW, which is 48\% of its total installed capacity  , since inception 35 years ago.
Revised:  Under his leadership NTPC added over 15,000 MW, which was 48\% of its total installed capacity , since inception 35 years ago.
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Original:  Under his leadership NTPC added over 15,000 MW, which is 48\% of its total installed capacity  , since inception 35 years ago.
Revised:  Under his leadership NTPC added over 15,000 MW, which is 48\% of its total installed capacity ' , since inception 35 years ago.
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Original:  • Authored three well received book : 1. 'Management by Idiots’, 2. Riding Two Tigers and 3. Delhi’s New Moti Bagh.
Revised:  • Authored three well received books : 1. 'Management by Idiots’, 2. Riding Two Tigers and 3. Delhi’s New Moti Bagh.
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Original:  Awards and honors Individual and Institutional Awards received from Hon'ble President & Prime Minister SCOPE Excellence Award Gold Trophy in individual category 2008–09 as the Best Individual Leader of a Public Sector Enterprise by Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh on 15 December 2010Prime Minister Presents SCOPE Excellence Awards.
Revised:  Awards and Individual and Institutional Awards received from Hon'ble President & Prime Minister SCOPE Excellence Award Gold Trophy in individual category 2008–09 as the Best Individual Leader of a Public Sector Enterprise by Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh on 15 December 2010Prime Minister Presents SCOPE Excellence Awards.
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Original:  Awards and honors Individual and Institutional Awards received from Hon'ble President & Prime Minister SCOPE Excellence Award Gold Trophy in individual category 2008–09 as the Best Individual Leader of a Public Sector Enterprise by Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh on 15 December 2010Prime Minister Presents SCOPE Excellence Awards.
Revised:  Awards and honors honorsIndividual and Institutional Awards received from Hon'ble President & Prime Minister SCOPE Excellence Award Gold Trophy in individual category 2008–09 as the Best Individual Leader of a Public Sector Enterprise by Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh on 15 December 2010Prime Minister Presents SCOPE Excellence Awards.
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Original:  At #40 (2nd among CEOs from PSUs) in a prestigious survey by The Economic Times for the year 2013 for making a list of 100 most powerful CEOs in India, based on the responses from a large number of senior executives who evaluated all the CEOs on six important parameters viz: Important Positions Held Present Responsibilities Professor of Practice, Indian Institute of Technology, Delhi, India Past Responsibilities
Revised:  At #40 (2nd among CEOs from PSUs) in a prestigious survey by The Economic Times for the year 2013 for making a list of 100 most powerful CEOs in India, based on the responses from a large number of senior executives who evaluated all the CEOs on six important parameters viz: Important Positions Held Professor of Practice, Indian Institute of Technology, Delhi, India Past Responsibilities
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