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Original: The Cholesterol embolism (often cholesterol crystal embolism or atheroembolism, sometimes blue toe or purple toe syndrome or trash foot or warfarin blue toe syndrome) occurs when cholesterol is released, usually from an atherosclerotic plaque, and travels as an embolus in the bloodstream to lodge (as an embolism) causing an obstruction in blood vessels further away.
Revised:  Cholesterol embolism (often cholesterol crystal embolism or atheroembolism, sometimes blue toe or purple toe syndrome or trash foot or warfarin blue toe syndrome) occurs when cholesterol is released, usually from an atherosclerotic plaque, and travels as an embolus in the bloodstream to lodge (as an embolism) causing an obstruction in blood vessels further away.
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Original: Cholesterol embolism (often cholesterol crystal embolism or atheroembolism, sometimes blue toe or purple toe syndrome or trash foot or warfarin blue toe syndrome) occurs when cholesterol is released, usually from an atherosclerotic plaque, and travels as an embolus in the bloodstream to lodge (as an embolism) causing an obstruction in blood vessels further away.
Revised: Cholesterol embolism occurs when cholesterol is released, usually from an atherosclerotic plaque, and travels as an embolus in the bloodstream to lodge (as an embolism) causing an obstruction in blood vessels further away.
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Original:  Most commonly this causes skin symptoms (usually livedo reticularis), gangrene of the extremities and sometimes renal failure;
Revised:  Most commonly this causes skin symptoms (usually livedo reticularis), gangrene of the extremities and sometimes kidney failure;
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Original:  Kidney involvement leads to the symptoms of renal failure, which are non-specific but usually cause nausea, reduced appetite (anorexia), raised blood pressure (hypertension), and occasionally the various symptoms of electrolyte disturbance such as an irregular heartbeat.
Revised:  Kidney involvement leads to the symptoms of kidney failure, which are non-specific but usually cause nausea, reduced appetite (anorexia), raised blood pressure (hypertension), and occasionally the various symptoms of electrolyte disturbance such as an irregular heartbeat.
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Original:  Other causes that may lead to similar symptoms include ischemic renal failure (kidney dysfunction due to an interrupted blood supply), a group of diseases known as thrombotic microangiopathies and endocarditis (infection of the heart valves with small clumps of infected tissue embolizing through the body).
Revised:  Other causes that may lead to similar symptoms include ischemic kidney failure (kidney dysfunction due to an interrupted blood supply), a group of diseases known as thrombotic microangiopathies and endocarditis (infection of the heart valves with small clumps of infected tissue embolizing through the body).
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Original:  If the kidneys are involved, tests of renal function (such as urea and creatinine) are elevated.
Revised:  If the kidneys are involved, tests of kidney function (such as urea and creatinine) are elevated.
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Original:  Using Microsoft Visual Studio, developers can also build their own custom software that works with Outlook and Office components .
Revised:  Using Microsoft Visual Studio, developers can also build their own custom software that works with Outlook and Office components 
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Original:  I've used outlook on By my account, and it was password so muchnBlake@com to with they allowed me to sign in to my account is what outlook so much did I can do make anytime link www.outlook.com so much that I used used a couple days ago, but For days ago, big and fatand fast speedy head at outlook. it 468467%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% For days ago, big and fatand fast speedy head at outlook.
Revised:  I've used outlook on By my account, %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% For days ago, big and fatand fast speedy head at outlook.
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Original:  I've used outlook on By my account, and it was password so muchnBlake@com to with they allowed me to sign in to my account is what outlook so much did I can do make anytime link www.outlook.com so much that I used used a couple days ago, but For days ago, big and fatand fast speedy head at outlook. it 468467%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% For days ago, big and fatand fast speedy head at outlook.
Revised:  I've used outlook on By my account, and it was password so muchnBlake@com to with they allowed me to sign in to my account is what outlook so much did I can do make anytime link www.outlook.com so much that I used used a couple days ago, but For days ago, big and fatand fast speedy head at outlook. it 468467%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: Versions Outlook has replaced Microsoft's previous scheduling and email clients, Schedule+ and Exchange Client.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Perpetual versions of Microsoft Outlook include: Name Version numberThe version numbers follows the Office numbers.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Name Version numberThe version numbers follows the Office numbers.
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Original:  2015 Included in Office 2016 and Office 365 Outlook 2019 16 September 24, 2018 Included in Office 2019 and Office 365 Outlook 2019 for Mac 16.17 September 24, 2018 Included in Office 2019 and Office 365 Outlook for Phones Tablets 1.3 2015 Included in Office 365, except some commercial editions Includes iOS and Android support%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Microsoft Windows Outlook 2002 Outlook 2002 introduced these new features:
Revised:  2015 Included in Office 2016 and Office 365 Outlook 2019 16 September 24, 2018 Included in Office 2019 and Office 365 Outlook 2019 for Mac 16.17 September 24, 2018 Included in Office 2019 and Office 365 Outlook for Phones %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Microsoft Windows Outlook 2002 Outlook 2002 introduced these new features:
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Original:  2015 Included in Office 2016 and Office 365 Outlook 2019 16 September 24, 2018 Included in Office 2019 and Office 365 Outlook 2019 for Mac 16.17 September 24, 2018 Included in Office 2019 and Office 365 Outlook for Phones Tablets 1.3 2015 Included in Office 365, except some commercial editions Includes iOS and Android support%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Microsoft Windows Outlook 2002 Outlook 2002 introduced these new features:
Revised:  2015 Included in Office 2016 and Office 365 Outlook 2019 16 September 24, 2018 Included in Office 2019 and Office 365 Outlook 2019 for Mac 16.17 September 24, 2018 Included in Office 2019 and Office 365 Outlook for Phones Tablets 1.3 2015 Included in Office 365, except some commercial editions Includes iOS and Android support%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Outlook 2002 Outlook 2002 introduced these new features:
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% After its initial launch on Microsoft's own platforms they launched the application for Android and iOS on September 23, 2015.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Outlook Groups was retired by Microsoft on May 1, 2018 The functionality was replaced by adding the "Groups node" to the folder list within the Outlook mobile app.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Outlook 2003 Outlook 2003 introduced these new features: Autocomplete suggestions for a single character Cached Exchange mode Colored (quick) flags Desktop Alert Email filtering to combat spam Images in HTML mail are blocked by default to prevent spammers from determining whether an email address is active via web beacon;
Revised:  2003 Outlook 2003 introduced these new features: Autocomplete suggestions for a single character Cached Exchange mode Colored (quick) flags Desktop Alert Email filtering to combat spam Images in HTML mail are blocked by default to prevent spammers from determining whether an email address is active via web beacon;
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Original: Outlook 98 and Outlook 2000 offer two configurations: Internet Mail Only (aka IMO mode): A lighter application mode with specific emphasis on POP3 and IMAP accounts, including a lightweight Fax application.
Revised: and offer two configurations: Internet Mail Only (aka IMO mode): A lighter application mode with specific emphasis on POP3 and IMAP accounts, including a lightweight Fax application.
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Original:  Her father , Naerbu was a high ranking warlord who controlled the area around Beijing and Tianjin, and her mother, Lady Lee , was a high-ranking Korean courtesan from Hamhung.
Revised:  Her father , Naerbu was a high ranking warlord who administered the area around Beijing and Tianjin, and her mother, Lady Lee , was a high-ranking Korean courtesan from Hamhung.
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Original:  Puyi was said that he loved her so much and he has kept a photograph of Tan with him until his death in 1967.
Revised:  Puyi was said that he loved her so much and he kept a photograph of Tan with him until his death in 1967.
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Original:  Puyi was said that he loved her so much and he kept a photograph of Tan with him until his death in 1967.
Revised:  Puyi kept a photograph of Tan with him until his death in 1967.
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Original:  Anniversaries Appointments Birthdays Events Meetings Education records Email addresses Fax communications Itineraries Instant message archives Legal documents Lists ( including task lists) Medical information, such as healthcare provider contact information, medical history, prescriptions Personal file collections (digital and physical):
Revised:  Anniversaries Appointments Birthdays Events Meetings Education records Email addresses Fax communications Itineraries Instant message archives Legal documents Lists ( such as reading lists, task lists) Medical information, such as healthcare provider contact information, medical history, prescriptions Personal file collections (digital and physical):
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Original:  documents, music, photos, videos and similar Personal diary/journal/memos/notes Project management features Recipes Reference materials (including scientific references, websites of interest) RSS/Atom feeds Reminders Voicemail communications Synchronization with a computer Some PIM/PDM software products are capable of synchronizing data over a computer network, including mobile ad hoc networks , or MANETs.
Revised:  documents, music, photos, videos and similar Personal diary/journal/memos/notes Project management features Recipes Reference materials (including scientific references, websites of interest) RSS/Atom feeds Reminders Voicemail communications Synchronization Some PIM/PDM software products are capable of synchronizing data over a computer network, including mobile ad hoc networks , or MANETs.
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Original:  documents, music, photos, videos and similar Personal diary/journal/memos/notes Project management features Recipes Reference materials (including scientific references, websites of interest) RSS/Atom feeds Reminders Voicemail communications Synchronization with a computer Some PIM/PDM software products are capable of synchronizing data over a computer network, including mobile ad hoc networks , or MANETs.
Revised:  documents, music, photos, videos and similar Personal diary/journal/memos/notes Project management features Recipes Reference materials (including scientific references, websites of interest) RSS/Atom feeds Reminders Voicemail communications Synchronization with a computer Some PIM/PDM software products are capable of synchronizing data over a computer network, including mobile ad hoc networks ( MANETs.
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Original:  This feature typically stores the personal data on Cloud drives allowing for continuous concurrent data updates/access, on the users computers, including desktop computers, laptop computers, and Smart devices personal digital assistants .
Revised:  This feature typically stores the personal data on cloud drives allowing for continuous concurrent data updates/access, on the users computers, including desktop computers, laptop computers, and Smart devices personal digital assistants .
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Original:  This feature typically stores the personal data on Cloud drives allowing for continuous concurrent data updates/access, on the users computers, including desktop computers, laptop computers, and Smart devices personal digital assistants .
Revised:  This feature typically stores the personal data on Cloud drives allowing for continuous concurrent data updates/access, on the user's computers, including desktop computers, laptop computers, and Smart devices personal digital assistants .
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Original:  This feature typically stores the personal data on Cloud drives allowing for continuous concurrent data updates/access, on the users computers, including desktop computers, laptop computers, and Smart devices personal digital assistants .
Revised:  This feature typically stores the personal data on Cloud drives allowing for continuous concurrent data updates/access, on the users computers, including desktop computers, laptop computers, and mobile devices, such a personal digital assistants .
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Original:  History Prior to the introduction of the term "  PDA" by Apple in 1992, handheld personal organizers such as the Sharp Wizard and the Psion Organiser were also referred to as "PIMs".
Revised:  History Prior to the introduction of the term " PDA" by Apple in 1992, handheld personal organizers such as the Psion Organiser and the Sharp Wizard were also referred to as "PIMs".
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Original:  The time management and communications functions of PIMs largely migrated from PDAs to smartphones, with  RIM (Research In Motion, now BlackBerry), Apple and others all manufacturing smartphones that offer most if not all of the functions of earlier PDAs.
Revised:  The time management and communications functions of PIMs largely migrated from PDAs to smartphones, with Apple, RIM (Research In Motion, now BlackBerry), Apple and others all manufacturing smartphones that offer most if not all of the functions of earlier PDAs.
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Original:  The time management and communications functions of PIMs largely migrated from PDAs to smartphones, with  RIM (Research In Motion, now BlackBerry), Apple and others all manufacturing smartphones that offer most if not all of the functions of earlier PDAs.
Revised:  The time management and communications functions of PIMs largely migrated from PDAs to smartphones, with RIM (Research In Motion, now BlackBerry), and others all manufacturing smartphones that offer most if not all of the functions of earlier PDAs.
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Original:  The convergence of many communications technologies, including telephone, email, social media, news and journalism, and radio transmission,  in a compact, ubiquitous device, along with the ability of these devices to create, transmit and publish voice , text, photos and videoalmost instantaneously is a development that many social commentators expect will revolutionize the way humans interact with each other, and with government and the media.
Revised:  The convergence of many communications technologies, including email, news and journalism, and radio transmission, in a compact, ubiquitous device, along with the ability of these devices to create, transmit and publish voice , text, photos and videoalmost instantaneously is a development that many social commentators expect will revolutionize the way humans interact with each other, and with government and the media.
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Original:  The convergence of many communications technologies, including telephone, email, social media, news and journalism, and radio transmission,  in a compact, ubiquitous device, along with the ability of these devices to create, transmit and publish voice , text, photos and videoalmost instantaneously is a development that many social commentators expect will revolutionize the way humans interact with each other, and with government and the media.
Revised:  The convergence of many communications technologies, including telephone, email, social media, news and journalism, radio transmission, in a compact, ubiquitous device, along with the ability of these devices to create, transmit and publish voice , text, photos and videoalmost instantaneously is a development that many social commentators expect will revolutionize the way humans interact with each other, and with government and the media.
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Original:  The convergence of many communications technologies, including telephone, email, social media, news and journalism, and radio transmission,  in a compact, ubiquitous device, along with the ability of these devices to create, transmit and publish voice , text, photos and videoalmost instantaneously is a development that many social commentators expect will revolutionize the way humans interact with each other, and with government and the media.
Revised:  The convergence of many communications technologies, including telephone, email, social media, news and journalism, and radio transmission, in a compact, ubiquitous device, along with the ability of these devices to create, transmit and publish photos , text, photos and videoalmost instantaneously is a development that many social commentators expect will revolutionize the way humans interact with each other, and with government and the media.
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Original:  The convergence of many communications technologies, including telephone, email, social media, news and journalism, and radio transmission,  in a compact, ubiquitous device, along with the ability of these devices to create, transmit and publish voice , text, photos and videoalmost instantaneously is a development that many social commentators expect will revolutionize the way humans interact with each other, and with government and the media.
Revised:  The convergence of many communications technologies, including telephone, email, social media, news and journalism, and radio transmission, in a compact, ubiquitous device, along with the ability of these devices to create, transmit and publish voice , text, video, and voice almost instantaneously, is a development that many social commentators expect will revolutionize the way humans interact with each other, and with government and the media.
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Original:  See also Personal information management Personal knowledge base Calendar Calendaring software Information management List of personal information managers Personal organizer Personal wiki List of wiki software Password manager  A list of research Personal information managers 
Revised:  See also Calendar Calendaring software Information management List of personal information managers Personal organizer Personal wiki List of wiki software Password manager A list of research Personal information managers 
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Original:  See also Personal information management Personal knowledge base Calendar Calendaring software Information management List of personal information managers Personal organizer Personal wiki List of wiki software Password manager  A list of research Personal information managers 
Revised:  See also Personal information management Personal knowledge base Calendar Calendaring software Information management List of personal information managers List of wiki software Password manager A list of research Personal information managers 
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Original:  See also Personal information management Personal knowledge base Calendar Calendaring software Information management List of personal information managers Personal organizer Personal wiki List of wiki software Password manager  A list of research Personal information managers 
Revised:  See also Personal information management Personal knowledge base Calendar Calendaring software Information management List of personal information managers Personal organizer Personal wiki List of wiki software Password manager Personal information management Personal knowledge base Personal organizer Personal wiki A list of research Personal information managers 
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Original:  See also Personal information management Personal knowledge base Calendar Calendaring software Information management List of personal information managers Personal organizer Personal wiki List of wiki software Password manager  A list of research Personal information managers 
Revised:  See also Personal information management Personal knowledge base Calendar Calendaring software Information management List of personal information managers Personal organizer Personal wiki List of wiki software Password manager A list of research Personal information managers .
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Original: The time management and communications functions of PIMs largely migrated from PDAs to smartphones, with Apple, RIM (Research In Motion, now BlackBerry), and others all manufacturing smartphones that offer most if not all of the functions of earlier PDAs.
Revised: The time management and communications functions of PIMs largely migrated from PDAs to smartphones, with Apple, RIM (Research In Motion, now BlackBerry), and others all manufacturing smartphones that offer most of the functions of earlier PDAs.
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Original:  The convergence of many communications technologies, including email, news and journalism, radio transmission, telephone, and social media, in a compact, ubiquitous device, along with the ability of these devices to create, transmit and publish photos, text, video, and voice almost instantaneously, is a development that many social commentators expect will revolutionize the way humans interact with each other, and with government and the media.
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Original:  The monarchy was abolished (the most recent one ruled by an emperor) and the republic was restored on 21 September 1979, when Bokassa was ousted and replaced with David Dacko, with French support.
Revised:  The monarchy was abolished (the most recent one ruled by an emperor) and the republic was restored on 21 September 1979, when Bokassa was overthrown and replaced with David Dacko, with French support.
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Original:  France severed ties with Bokassa, and began to plan his excommunication when the emperor began working with Muammar Gaddafi, a Libyan politician .
Revised:  France severed ties with Bokassa, and began to plan his excommunication when the emperor began working with Muammar Gaddafi, the Libyan dictator .
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Original: France's role When Jean-Bédel Bokassa took control of the Central African Republic, the French president at the time, Charles de Gaulle, did not want to engage with the new leader, refusing to receive him and calling him a "bloody idiot  " After heavy advising from his chief of staff, Jacques Foccart, De Gaulle finally met Bokassa in 1969, three years after he came into power.
Revised: France's role When Jean-Bédel Bokassa took control of the Central African Republic, the French president at the time, Charles de Gaulle, did not want to engage with the new leader, refusing to receive him and calling him a "bloody idiot . " After heavy advising from his chief of staff, Jacques Foccart, De Gaulle finally met Bokassa in 1969, three years after he came into power.
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Original: Proclamation File:Imperial Standard of Bokassa I (1976–1979).svg|Imperial Standard of Bokassa I.
Revised: Proclamation 
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Original:  She became a judge in 1937 and was, in fact, one of the first female judges in the British Empire next to Emily Murphy.
Revised:  She was, in fact, one of the first female judges in the British Empire next to Emily Murphy.
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Original: Justice Anna Chandy (1905-1996), also known as Anna Chandi, was the first female judge (1937) and then (1959) High Court judge  in India.
Revised: Justice Anna Chandy (1905-1996), also known as Anna Chandi, was the first female judge (1937) and then High Court judge in India.
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