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Original:  The next step to petrifying the wood is thinly cutting it,  soaking it in acids and a silica solution,  heating it, and lastly, cooling the product in argon.
Revised:  The next step to petrifying the wood is thinly cutting it, soaking it in acids and a silica solution, after that heating it, and lastly, cooling the product in argon.
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Original:  The first step leading to the petrifying of the wood is thinly cutting it, then soaking it in acids and a silica solution, after that  heating it, and lastly, cooling the product in argon.
Revised:  The first step leading to the petrifying of the wood is thinly cutting it, then soaking it in acids and a silica solution, after that , heating it, and lastly, cooling the product in argon.
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Original:  The demand from the side of the Greek government as well as from greek or non-greek organizations and British celebrities like Sean Connery for the restoration of the marbles - a demand which was an idea of the former Greek Culture Minister and actress Melina Mercouri - didn't have any result until today due to the denial  of the British Museum administration
Revised:  The demand from the side of the Greek government as well as from greek or non-greek organizations and British celebrities like Sean Connery for the restoration of the marbles - a demand which was an idea of the former Greek Culture Minister and actress Melina Mercouri - didn't have any result until today due to the denial from the side of the British Museum administration
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Original:  This statementbrought back some of the demands by the Greek government regarding the issue of  Parthenon Marbles' restoration from the United Kingdom to Greece.
Revised:  In response to this statement, the Greek government re-issued demands regarding the issue of Parthenon Marbles' restoration from the United Kingdom to Greece.
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Original:  This statementbrought back some of the demands by the Greek government regarding the issue of  Parthenon Marbles' restoration from the United Kingdom to Greece.
Revised:  This statementbrought back some of the demands by the Greek government regarding the issue of the Parthenon Marbles' restoration from the United Kingdom to Greece.
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Original: After visiting the constructions' site, Greek Culture Minister George Voulgarakis reiterated yesterday that the new Athens museum would be ready to receive visitors by the end of next year.
Revised: After visiting the construction site, Greek Culture Minister George Voulgarakis reiterated yesterday that the new Athens museum would be ready to receive visitors by the end of next year.
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Original:  The new Acropolis Museum, which is located in the area of Makriyannis ;
Revised:  The new Acropolis Museum, which is located in the area of Makriyannis ,
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Original:  The Parthenon Marbles - also known as  Elgin Marbles - are today located in a specific hall in the British Museum of London.
Revised:  The Parthenon Marbles - also known as the Elgin Marbles - are today located in a specific hall in the British Museum of London.
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Original:  The Parthenon Marbles - also known as  Elgin Marbles - are today located in a specific hall in the British Museum of London.
Revised:  The Parthenon Marbles - also known as Elgin Marbles - are currently located in a specific hall in the British Museum of London.
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Original: The   president of the Organization for the construction of the new Acropolis Museum, professor Dimitrios Pandermalis, announced that the Museum will be ready to operate as an exhibition center for archaeological treasures in 2007.
Revised: The The president of the Organization for the construction of the new Acropolis Museum, professor Dimitrios Pandermalis, announced that the Museum will be ready to operate as an exhibition center for archaeological treasures in 2007.
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Original: The president of the Organization for the construction of the new Acropolis Museum, professor Dimitrios Pandermalis, announced that the Museum will be ready to operate as an exhibition center for archaeological treasures in 2007.
Revised: The president of the organization for the construction of the new Acropolis Museum, professor Dimitrios Pandermalis, announced that the Museum will be ready to operate as an exhibition center for archaeological treasures in 2007.
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Original:  In response to this statement, the Greek government re-issued demands regarding the issue of the Parthenon Marbles' restoration  from the United Kingdom to Greece .
Revised:  In response to this statement, the Greek government re-issued demands regarding the subject of the Parthenon Marbles' restoration from the United Kingdom to Greece .
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Original:  In response to this statement, the Greek government re-issued demands regarding the issue of the Parthenon Marbles' restoration  from the United Kingdom to Greece .
Revised:  In response to this statement, the Greek government re-issued demands regarding the issue of the Parthenon Marbles' restoration from the United Kingdom .
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Original: Mr. Hsieh, the 59-year-old mayor of Taiwan's second largest city and major seaport , Kaohsiung, is a close ally of Mr. Chen and will be expected to closely carry out the president's agenda.
Revised: Mr. Hsieh, the 59-year-old mayor of Taiwan's second largest city , Kaohsiung, is a close ally of Mr. Chen and will be expected to closely carry out the president's agenda.
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Original:  The Nationalist Party, or Kuomintang, which  won the parliamentary elections, favors maintaining the status quo.
Revised:  The Nationalist Party, or Kuomintang, which The Kuomintang, which won the parliamentary elections, favors maintaining the status quo.
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Original:  Mr. Hsieh   is expected to announce a new cabinet in two days.
Revised:  Mr. Hsieh Mr. Hsieh is expected to announce a new cabinet in two days.
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Original:  Party leaders say the question of whether Taiwan should be independent or reunited with mainland Chinashould be decided by future generations.
Revised:  Party leaders say the question of whether Taiwan should be independent or reunited with mainland China should be decided by future generations.
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Original:  New Zealand under went significant welfare reform during the early 1990s, with a 25\% cut in benefits at the 1991 'Mother of all Budgets' by  Ruth Richardson.
Revised:  New Zealand under went significant welfare reform during the early 1990s, with a 25\% cut in benefits at the 1991 'Mother of all Budgets' by w: Ruth Richardson.
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Original:  Brash's advocacy of adopting children out has lead to a number of attacks, Prime Minsiter Helen Clark responed by saying "I think we need to support people to keep their babies".
Revised:  Brash's advocacy of adopting children out has lead to a number of attacks, Prime Minister Helen Clark responded by saying "I think we need to support people to keep their babies".
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Original:  The group accuse the Indonesian military of "conducting genocide in their homelands ." The 36 adults and seven children spent five days at sea in a traditional outrigger boat before arriving in far north Queensland's Cape York.
Revised:  The group accuse the Indonesian military of "conducting genocide in their homeland ." The 36 adults and seven children spent five days at sea in a traditional outrigger boat before arriving in far north Queensland's Cape York.
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Original:  Most of the group are being relocated by private jet, from Australia's remote immigration detention centre on Christmas Island , to Melbourne.
Revised:  Most of the group are being relocated by private jet, from Australia's remote immigration detention centre on Christmas Island to Melbourne.
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Original:  Senator Vanstone said a decision was still pending on one of the asylum seekers  as there were further, specific case issues to be addressed.
Revised:  Senator Vanstone said a decision was still pending on one of the asylum seekers , as there were further, specific case issues to be addressed.
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Original:  Last month, Indonesia's ambassador Hamzah Thayeb warned that Australia's relationship with Indonesia would be affected if the Papuans were granted asylum.
Revised:  Last month, Indonesia's ambassador , Hamzah Thayeb, warned that Australia's relationship with Indonesia would be affected if the Papuans were granted asylum.
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Original:  The Indonesian House of Representatives (DPR) has denounced the Australian government's decision, urging the government to send a formal protest note to the Australian government over the visas and political asylum  to the 42 Indonesian citizens.
Revised:  The Indonesian House of Representatives (DPR) has denounced the Australian government's decision, urging the government to send a formal protest note to the Australian government over the visas and political asylum granted to the 42 Indonesian citizens.
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Original:  "We question the decision to grant visas and political asylum at a time when the security situation in Papua province is tense,"  member of the House Commission I for defence, foreign and information affairs, Effendy Mara Sakti of the Indonesian Democratic Party-Struggle (PDIP) said .
Revised:  "We question the decision to grant visas and political asylum at a time when the security situation in Papua province is tense," said member of the House Commission I for defence, foreign and information affairs, Effendy Mara Sakti of the Indonesian Democratic Party-Struggle (PDIP) said .
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Original:  "We question the decision to grant visas and political asylum at a time when the security situation in Papua province is tense,"  member of the House Commission I for defence, foreign and information affairs, Effendy Mara Sakti of the Indonesian Democratic Party-Struggle (PDIP) said .
Revised:  "We question the decision to grant visas and political asylum at a time when the security situation in Papua province is tense," member of the House Commission I for defence, foreign and information affairs, Effendy Mara Sakti of the Indonesian Democratic Party-Struggle (PDIP) .
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Original:  Amnesty now encourages the government to consider the plight of the Papuan refugees  as under Australia's temporary protection regime the refugees now face isolation from their families left behind and face uncertainty about their future," the organisation said in a statement.
Revised:  Amnesty now encourages the government to consider the plight of the Papuan refugees , as under Australia's temporary protection regime the refugees now face isolation from their families left behind and face uncertainty about their future," the organisation said in a statement.
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Original:  Amnesty reports of "extrajudicial executions, "disappearances",torture and ill-treatment and arbitrary detentions in Papua Province."
Revised:  Amnesty reports of "extrajudicial executions, 'disappearances,' torture, ill-treatment and arbitrary detentions in Papua Province."
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Original:  Australian Greens 's Senator Kerry Nettle also welcomed the decision.
Revised:  Australian Greens Senator Kerry Nettle also welcomed the decision.
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Original:  400px "Rather then being isolated and locked-up thousands of miles away on Christmas Island, these very courageous individuals can receive the support they deserve from the local community.
Revised:  400px "Rather then being isolated and locked up thousands of miles away on Christmas Island, these very courageous individuals can receive the support they deserve from the local community.
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Original:  This decision also means Australians will be able to hear first-hand about the atrocities and escalating human right abuses that are unfolding in one of our closest neighbouring countries," said Mr Chesterfield.
Revised:  This decision also means Australians will be able to hear first hand about the atrocities and escalating human right abuses that are unfolding in one of our closest neighbouring countries," said Mr Chesterfield.
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Original: Last week, Indonesian media showed police shooting directly at students in local university grounds.
Revised: Last week, Indonesian media showed police shooting directly at students on local university grounds.
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Original:  He is quoted as saying that: "We feel that our unity and cohesion are being threatened by the presence of foreign intrusion and concerns so there is a balance between international concerns and sovereignty that we want to strike very peacefully."
Revised:  He is quoted as saying , "We feel that our unity and cohesion are being threatened by the presence of foreign intrusion and concerns so there is a balance between international concerns and sovereignty that we want to strike very peacefully."
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Original:  Minister Sudarsono also stated that the curbs should "extend to foreign nongovernmental organizations (NGOs) and churches, who he thought might create conflict in the province by encouraging Papuans to campaign on issues of human rights."
Revised:  Minister Sudarsono also stated that the curbs should "extend to foreign nongovernmental organizations (NGOs) and churches, whom he thought might create conflict in the province by encouraging Papuans to campaign on issues of human rights."
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Original:  Ken Roth, Executive Director of Human Rights Watch  is alarmed at efforts by the Indonesian government to ban or limit press coverage of human rights violations and other issues in Papua.
Revised:  Ken Roth, Executive Director of Human Rights Watch , is alarmed at efforts by the Indonesian government to ban or limit press coverage of human rights violations and other issues in Papua.
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Original:  Senior Indonesian ministers have vehemently denied that the people of West Papuan are being repressed
Revised:  Senior Indonesian ministers have vehemently denied that the people of West Papua are being repressed
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Original: Uniting Church minister Reverend John Barr, who recently returned from the area, warned of an "intensification of violence" and also  demands from protesters to have the Freeport mine and the Indonesian government held responsible for despoiling the Papuan environment.
Revised: Uniting Church minister Reverend John Barr, who recently returned from the area, warned of an "intensification of violence" and also recounted demands from protesters to have the Freeport mine and the Indonesian government held responsible for despoiling the Papuan environment.
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Original:  Indonesia’s Minister of Defense, Juwono Sudarsono, said in February that the government will "maintain curbs on foreign media  reporting from Papua.
Revised:  Indonesia’s Minister of Defense, Juwono Sudarsono, said in February that the government will "maintain curbs on foreign media " reporting from Papua.
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Original:  300px|Placard at a support rally in Darwin.
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Original: A hostage situation in the private mental clinic Castalia, in the suburb of Glyfada, south Athens, has ended after the arrest of a 26 years old manwho had locked himself up along with three hostages in the Accounts Department, on the first floor of the building.
Revised: A hostage situation in the private mental clinic Castalia, in the suburb of Glyfada, south Athens, has ended after the arrest of a 26 year old man. The man had locked himself up along with three hostages in the Accounts Department, on the first floor of the building.
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Original:  His demands were unknown to the police as long as he didn't negotiate them with the police negotiators.
Revised:  His demands were unknown to the police as he did not communicate tehm to the police negotiators.
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Original:  His demands were unknown to the police as he did not communicate tehm to the police negotiators.
Revised:  His demands were unknown to the police as he did not communicate them to the police negotiators.
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Original: A hostage situation in the private mental clinic Castalia, in the suburb of Glyfada, south Athens, has ended after the arrest of a 26 year old man.
Revised: A hostage situation in the private mental clinic Castalia, in the suburb of Glyfada, south Athens, has ended with the arrest of a 26 year old man.
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Original:  According to Greek police, the man - who was armed - faces mental problems and is a drug addict.
Revised:  According to Greek police, the man — who was armed - faces mental problems and is a drug addict.
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Original:  According to Greek police, the man - who was armed - faces mental problems and is a drug addict.
Revised:  According to Greek police, the man - who was armed — has mental problems and is a drug addict.
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Original:  His demands were unknown to the police  as he did not communicate them to the police negotiators.
Revised:  His demands were unknown to the police , as he did not communicate them to the police negotiators.
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Original:  The situation in  Castalia clinic prompted the Greek Minister of Public Order to cancel his scheduled meetings in order to personally supervise the rescue operation
Revised:  The situation in the Castalia clinic prompted the Greek Minister of Public Order to cancel his scheduled meetings in order to personally supervise the rescue operation
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Original:  The situation in  Castalia clinic prompted the Greek Minister of Public Order to cancel his scheduled meetings in order to personally supervise the rescue operation
Revised:  The situation in Castalia clinic prompted the Greek Minister of Public Order to cancel his scheduled meetings in order to supervise personally the rescue operation
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Original: According to Greek police , the man— who was armed — has mental problems and is a drug addict.
Revised: According to Greek police the man, who was armed — has mental problems and is a drug addict.
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Original: According to Greek police , the man— who was armed — has mental problems and is a drug addict.
Revised: According to Greek police , the man— who was armed , has mental problems and is a drug addict.
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Original:  Thailand's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) have petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming election and postpone it from April 2 to bring an end to the current political crisis.
Revised:  Thailand's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) has petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming election and postpone it from April 2 to bring an end to the current political crisis.
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Original:  Thailand's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) have petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming election and postpone it from April 2 to bring an end to the current political crisis.
Revised:  Thailand's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) have petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming April 2 election and to postpone it, to bring an end to the current political crisis.
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Original:  In addition  Parinya expressed doubt that the required 500 MPs would be returned  due to the main opposition party election boycott and the requirement for 20\% of the eligible electorate to vote for a candidate, even when standing unopposed.
Revised:  In addition , Parinya expressed doubt that the required 500 MPs would be returned due to the main opposition party election boycott and the requirement for 20\% of the eligible electorate to vote for a candidate, even when standing unopposed.
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Original:  In addition  Parinya expressed doubt that the required 500 MPs would be returned  due to the main opposition party election boycott and the requirement for 20\% of the eligible electorate to vote for a candidate, even when standing unopposed.
Revised:  In addition Parinya expressed doubt that the required 500 MPs would be returned , due to the main opposition party election boycott and the requirement for 20\% of the eligible electorate to vote for a candidate, even when standing unopposed.
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Original:  In addition  Parinya expressed doubt that the required 500 MPs would be returned  due to the main opposition party election boycott and the requirement for 20\% of the eligible electorate to vote for a candidate, even when standing unopposed.
Revised:  In addition Parinya expressed doubt that the required 500 MPs would be returned due to the main opposition party election boycott and the requirement for 20\% of the eligible electorate to vote for a candidate, even when the candidate stands unopposed.
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Original:  Thailand's Democrats, the current main opposition party  who are boycotting the April 2 election, raised doubts over the validity of a number of Thai Rak Thai candidate' s listings.
Revised:  Thailand's Democrats, the current main opposition party , who are boycotting the April 2 election, raised doubts over the validity of a number of Thai Rak Thai candidate' s listings.
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Original:  Thailand's Democrats, the current main opposition party  who are boycotting the April 2 election, raised doubts over the validity of a number of Thai Rak Thai candidate' s listings.
Revised:  Thailand's Democrats, the current main opposition party who are boycotting the April 2 election, raised doubts over the validity of a number of Thai Rak Thai candidates' listings.
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Original:  It isn't just the candidates of smaller parties that have caught the eye of the Democrat panel examining candidate credentials , they claim at least three of the Thai Rak Thai candidates should be disenfranchised due to having not voted during the 2005 election.
Revised:  It isn't just the candidates of smaller parties that have caught the eye of the Democrat panel examining candidate credentials . They claim that at least three of the Thai Rak Thai candidates should be disenfranchised due to having not voted during the 2005 election.
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Original:  The three accused - including the party's deputy leader - dispute the claim that they failed to vote.
Revised:  The three accused — including the party's deputy leader - dispute the claim that they failed to vote.
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Original:  The three accused - including the party's deputy leader - dispute the claim that they failed to vote.
Revised:  The three accused - including the party's deputy leader — dispute the claim that they failed to vote.
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Original:  While PAD protesters protested away from Government House, the beleagured PM returned unnanounced from his election campaigning in the country's northeast.
Revised:  While PAD protesters demonstrated away from Government House, the beleagured PM returned unnanounced from his election campaigning in the country's northeast.
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Original:  In addition to the continuing calls for him to leave office, his key privatisation policies had been dealt a serious blow with the privatisation of the state-owned power company EGAT being ruled unlawful.
Revised:  In addition to his having been continuingly called upon leave office, his key privatisation policies had been dealt a serious blow with the privatisation of the state-owned power company EGAT being ruled unlawful.
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