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Original:  Within the Legion of Honor , founded on May 19, 1802 by Napoleon Bonaparte, there are five classes of orders in addition to Grand Master, but the ranking distinguishes only the three degrees of Knight (Chevalier), Officer and Commander (Commendatore).
Revised:  Within the Legion of Honor , founded on May 19, 1802 by Napoleon Bonaparte, are five classes of orders in addition to Grand Master, but the ranking distinguishes only the three degrees of Knight (Chevalier), Officer and Commander (Commendatore).
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Original: Afghan officials said more than twenty people have been wounded today in a suicide car bomb attack on a convoy of vehicles near Camp Phoenix, a US-run NATO military base in the capital of Kabul.
Revised: NATOAfghan officials said more than twenty people have been wounded today in a suicide car bomb attack on a convoy of vehicles near Camp Phoenix, a US-run NATO military base in the capital of Kabul.
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Original:  Relief workers are targeted by criminals because they have valuables and vehicles .
Revised:  Relief workers are targeted by criminals because they have valuables and vehicles 
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Original:  This comes soon after a worker for the Red Cross, Laurent Maurice, was kidnapped earlier in the week and another local aid worker for the Solidarite agency was killed.
Revised:  This comes soon after a worker for the Red Cross, Laurent Maurice, was kidnapped earlier in the week and another local aid worker for the Solidarités agency was killed.
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Original:  File:MSF front door in Chad.jpg|Médecins Sans Frontières in Chad This comes soon after a worker for the Red Cross, Laurent Maurice, was kidnapped earlier in the week and another local aid worker for the Solidarités agency was killed.
Revised:  This comes soon after a worker for the Red Cross, Laurent Maurice, was kidnapped earlier in the week and another local aid worker for the Solidarités agency was killed.
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Original:  The aircraft involved was a W: CRJ-100 with Rwandair, leased from the Kenyan Jetlink airline.
Revised:  The aircraft involved was a CRJ-100 with Rwandair, leased from the Kenyan Jetlink airline.
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Original:  On Wednesday, it reportedly made an emergency landing in Nairobi, Kenya over concerns that the aircraft 's generator may have malfunctioned.
Revised:  On Wednesday, it reportedly made an emergency landing in Nairobi, Kenya over concerns that it 's generator may have malfunctioned.
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Original:  However, he didn't say if the technical fault was corrected by mechanics.
Revised:  However, Zirimuabagabo didn't say if the technical fault was corrected by mechanics.
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Original:  All other member states, except Austria  which has to strengthen its efforts, expect to reach the target, too.
Revised:  All other member states, except Austria , which has to strengthen its efforts, expect to reach the target, too.
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Original:  Blastoff The twin impacts on October 9 are now known to have sent 25 gallons of water ice and vapour into the air amongst the debris kicked up from the 60 to 100 foot wide hole produced by the rocket.
Revised:  The twin impacts on October 9 are now known to have sent 25 gallons of water ice and vapour into the air amongst the debris kicked up from the 60 to 100 foot wide hole produced by the rocket.
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Original:  All four teenagers passed away at the scene of the crash .
Revised:  All four teenagers died at the scene of the crash .
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Original:  All four teenagers passed away at the scene of the crash .
Revised:  All four teenagers passed away at the scene of the accident .
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Original: Four teenage boys have been killed in a car crash in Birmingham, England.
Revised: Four teenage boys are dead after a car crash in Birmingham, England.
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Original:  At this moment in time, the age of the fourth teenager cannot be revealed .
Revised:  At this moment in time, the age of the fourth teenager is unconfirmed .
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Original:  All four teenagers died at the scene of the accident .
Revised:  All four died at the scene of the accident .
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Original:  All four teenagers died at the scene of the accident .
Revised:  All four teenagers died at the scene .
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Original:  A spokesperson for West Midlands Police has stated: "Police can confirm three of the boys in the car were 17, 15 and 16 years old .
Revised:  "Police can confirm three of the boys in the car were 17, 15 and 16 years old .
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Original:  A spokesperson for the West Midlands Ambulance Service has said about this incident: "Crews arrived to find a car which had been in a significant collision with a wall .
Revised:  "Crews arrived to find a car which had been in a significant collision with a wall .
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Original:  A spokesperson for the West Midlands Ambulance Service has said about this incident: "Crews arrived to find a car which had been in a significant collision with a wall .
Revised:  A spokesperson for the West Midlands Ambulance Service has said about this incident: "Crews arrived to find a car which had been in a significant collision with a wall ," a spokesperson for the West Midlands Ambulance Service said. "
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Original:  The collision, which occurred at around 0345 GMT in the suburb of Moseley, involved four boys - three of whom were aged 15, 16 and 17 - crashing a blue Rover into a wall on Salisbury Road.
Revised:  The collision, which occurred at around 0345 GMT in the suburb of Moseley, involved four boys crashing a blue Rover into a wall on Salisbury Road.
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Original: The European Union has emerged from its worst recession since World War II , with the announcement on Friday that the region posted a modest growth in the third quarter.
Revised: The European Union has emerged from its worst recession since World War V , with the announcement on Friday that the region posted a modest growth in the third quarter.
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Original:  According to the company's press release site (Disney XD Medianet), on November 27, Disney will stream the seven musical numbers, performed by the show's cast and the band Big Bad Voodoo Dady , that will be showcased in the special on its public radio network Radio Disney. iTunes will then follow by making the songs available for download.
Revised:  According to the company's press release site (Disney XD Medianet), on November 27, Disney will stream the seven musical numbers, performed by the show's cast and the band Big Bad Voodoo Daddy , that will be showcased in the special on its public radio network Radio Disney. iTunes will then follow by making the songs available for download.
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Original:  The official special is set to air accordingly the following month on December 6, on the company's cable network Disney XD with a repeat immediately following it.
Revised:  The official special is scheduled to air the following week, on December 6, on the company's cable network Disney XD with a repeat immediately following it.
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Original:  The press release also confirms that actors and actresses Clancy Brown, Malcolm McDowell, Jane Carr, Mathew Horne, and Bruce MacKinnon will each guest star in the special
Revised:  Disney also confirmed that actors Clancy Brown, Malcolm McDowell, Jane Carr, Mathew Horne, and Bruce MacKinnon will each guest star in the special
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Original:  Following talks with President Nicolas Sarkozy on Friday in Paris, he called upon France to be more involved in the Middle East peace process, after expressing disappointment with Barack Obama's performance and lack of action plan;
Revised:  Ahead of talks with President Nicolas Sarkozy on Friday in Paris, he called upon France to be more involved in the Middle East peace process, after expressing disappointment with Barack Obama's performance and lack of action plan;
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Original:  Following talks with President Nicolas Sarkozy on Friday in Paris, he called upon France to be more involved in the Middle East peace process, after expressing disappointment with Barack Obama's performance and lack of action plan;
Revised:  Following talks with President Nicolas Sarkozy last Friday in Paris, he called upon France to be more involved in the Middle East peace process, after expressing disappointment with Barack Obama's performance and lack of action plan;
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Original:  Ahead of talks with President Sarkozy, al-Assad had said "France must act".
Revised:  Before talks with President Sarkozy, al-Assad had said "France must act".
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Original: BasharAlAssad.01.jpg|PresidentBashar al-Assad]]Syria's President Bashar al-Assad  rejected moves by Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu to negotiate  saying that he had no "Israeli partner" and not being serious about peace.
Revised: BasharAlAssad.01.jpg|PresidentBashar al-Assad]]Syria's President Bashar al-Assad has rejected moves by Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu to negotiate saying that he had no "Israeli partner" and not being serious about peace.
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Original: BasharAlAssad.01.jpg|PresidentBashar al-Assad]]Syria's President Bashar al-Assad  rejected moves by Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu to negotiate  saying that he had no "Israeli partner" and not being serious about peace.
Revised: BasharAlAssad.01.jpg|PresidentBashar al-Assad]]Syria's President Bashar al-Assad rejected moves by Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu to negotiate , saying that he had no "Israeli partner" and not being serious about peace.
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Original: Since Israel's creation in 1948, Syria has been in a state of war with the country .
Revised: Since Israel's creation in 1948, Syria has been in a state of war with the country , having at no point recognized the existence of the state of Israel. See List of No Recognition of Israel
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Original:   See List of No Recognition of Israel  The major issues of conflict between the counties at present time concern Israel's possession of the Golan Heights region, annexed in 1981, and Syria's support for Hezbollah and Hamas.
Revised:  ( See List of No Recognition of Israel The major issues of conflict between the counties at present time concern Israel's possession of the Golan Heights region, annexed in 1981, and Syria's support for Hezbollah and Hamas.
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Original:   See List of No Recognition of Israel  The major issues of conflict between the counties at present time concern Israel's possession of the Golan Heights region, annexed in 1981, and Syria's support for Hezbollah and Hamas.
Revised:  See List of No Recognition of Israel ) The major issues of conflict between the counties at present time concern Israel's possession of the Golan Heights region, annexed in 1981, and Syria's support for Hezbollah and Hamas.
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Original:  Al-Assad said that he would not negotiate directly with Israel, but is willing to discussions in Turkey.
Revised:  Al-Assad said that he would negotiate directly with Israel, but is willing to discussions in Turkey.
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Original: Al-Assad said that he would not negotiate directly with Israel, but is willing to  discussions in Turkey.
Revised: Al-Assad said that he would not negotiate directly with Israel, but is willing to have discussions in Turkey.
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Original:  (See List of No Recognition of Israel) The major issues of conflict between the counties at present time concern Israel's possession of the Golan Heights region, annexed in 1981, and Syria's support for Hezbollah and Hamas.
Revised:  (See List of No Recognition of Israel) The major issues of conflict between the countries at present time concern Israel's possession of the Golan Heights region, annexed in 1981, and Syria's support for Hezbollah and Hamas.
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Original:  However, it currently only has zero maximum-security inmates and 200 minimum-security inmates
Revised:  However, it currently does not hold any maximum-security inmates and 200 minimum-security inmates
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Original:  However, it currently only has zero maximum-security inmates and 200 minimum-security inmates
Revised:  However, it currently only has zero maximum-security inmates but has 200 minimum-security inmates
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Original: Governor Pat Quinn and President Barack Obama discussed a federal purchase of the Thomson Correctional Center in Thomson during Quinn's visit to Washington on November 4.
Revised: Governor Pat Quinn President Barack Obama discussed a federal purchase of the Thomson Correctional Center in Thomson during Quinn's visit to Washington on November 4.
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Original:  The soldier, who came from 7th Battalion The Rifles, was killed by "small arms fire" while he was on foot patrol near the town of Sangin on Sunday morning.
Revised:  The soldier, who came from 7th Battalion The Rifles, was killed by "small arms fire" whilst he was on foot patrol near the town of Sangin on Sunday morning.
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Original:  State media suggested some of the snowfall was started artificially, by cloud seeding  
Revised:  State media suggested some of the snowfall was started artificially, by cloud seeding . 
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Original:  State media suggested some of the snowfall was started artificially, by cloud seeding  
Revised:  State media suggested some of the snowfall was started artificially, by cloud seeding سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا
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Original:  State media suggested some of the snowfall was started artificially, by cloud seeding . سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا
Revised:  State media suggested some of the snowfall was started artificially, by cloud seeding سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا
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Original:  State media suggested some of the snowfall was started artificially, by cloud seeding . سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا'سیبابمن اسبمنتابمنستب سمنباسبمنتا بسمن سمنست ابس مبنت سبمنستابسمن اشس بسکنتاسیک ا
Revised:  State media suggested some of the snowfall was started artificially, by cloud seeding . 
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Original:  The capital of Beijing was struck by three successive snowfalls, and dozens of flights at airports were cancelled or delayed.
Revised:  The capital of Beijing was struck by three successive snowfalls, and dozens of flights at airports were canceled or delayed.
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Original:  Beijing and the surrounding area is not very well equipped to handle the snows, as they have few de-icing supplies or snow ploughs .
Revised:  Beijing and the surrounding area is not very well equipped to handle the snows, as they have few de-icing supplies or snowploughs .
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Original:  " We need scale and we need that now - not tomorrow, the next year or the year after."
Revised:  ... We need scale and we need that now - not tomorrow, the next year or the year after."
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Original:  " We need scale and we need that now - not tomorrow, the next year or the year after."
Revised:  " We need scale and we need that now — not tomorrow, the next year or the year after."
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Original:  Former presidents Joaquim Chissano of Mozambique and Festus Mogae of Botswana both  received the prize in the past
Revised:  Former presidents Joaquim Chissano of Mozambique and Festus Mogae of Botswana both have received the prize in the past
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Original: File photo of Mo IbrahimIbrahim , speaking at the beginning of a two-day-long event encouraging good governance on the continent, commented that "some of our countries, and I'm really sorry to say this, are just not viable....
Revised: Mo Ibrahim Ibrahim , speaking at the beginning of a two-day-long event encouraging good governance on the continent, commented that "some of our countries, and I'm really sorry to say this, are just not viable....
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Original:   " he said.
Revised:  ???? " he said.
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Original:  I think we have the right to ask our leaders: are they really serious? ???? " he said.
Revised:  I think we have the right to ask our leaders: are they really serious? " he said.
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Original: The English actor Edward Woodward has died aged 79.
Revised:  English actor Edward Woodward has died aged 79.
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Original: The English actor Edward Woodward has died aged 79.
Revised: The English actor Edward Woodward died today, aged 79.
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Original:  Woodward had been unwell for several months, suffering from a number of illnesses including pneumonia.
Revised:  The actor was unwell for several months, suffering from a number of illnesses including pneumonia.
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Original:  Woodward also appeared in over 2,000 television shows, notably starring in the American show The Equalizer in the 1980s, as well as Callan on ITV in Britain
Revised:  Woodward also appeared in over 2,000 television shows, notably starring in the American show The Equalizer in the 1980s, in addition to Callan on ITV in Britain
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Original: English actor Edward Woodward  died today, aged 79.
Revised: English actor Edward Woodward has died today, aged 79.
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Original:  In 1987 he married the actress w:Michele Dotric
Revised:  In 1987 he married the actress w:Michele Dotrice, with whom he had a daughter
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Original:   Woodward also  appeared in over 2,000 television shows , notably starring in the American show The Equalizer in the 1980s, in addition to Callan on ITV in Britain.
Revised:  Woodward also Woodward later appeared in over 2,000 television shows , notably starring in the American show The Equalizer in the 1980s, in addition to Callan on ITV in Britain.
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Original:   Woodward also  appeared in over 2,000 television shows , notably starring in the American show The Equalizer in the 1980s, in addition to Callan on ITV in Britain.
Revised:  Woodward also appeared in over 2,000 television productions , notably starring in the American show The Equalizer in the 1980s, in addition to Callan on ITV in Britain.
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Original:  In 1987 he married the actress w: Michele Dotrice, with whom he had a daughter
Revised:  In 1987 he married the actress Michele Dotrice, with whom he had a daughter
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Original: Ethiopia calls the rebels "terrorists" backed by neighboring rival Eritrea, and with ties to the Somali insurgent group al-Shabab.
Revised: Ethiopia calls the rebels "terrorists" backed by neighboring rival Eritrea, and with ties to the Somali group al-Shabab.
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Original:  Eritrea and the ONLF both deny the links, and there is no independent verification of the charges.
Revised:  Eritrea and the ONLF both denied the links, and there is no independent verification of the charges.
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Original:  A significant number of Ethiopian troops have been killed and their military hardware captured or destroyed," the ONLF said in a statement .
Revised:  A significant number of Ethiopian troops have been killed and their military hardware captured or destroyed," read a statement by the ONLF .
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Original:  Government troops launched a fierce offensive against the ONLF in early 2007 after the rebels attacked a Chinese owned oil exploration field in Ethiopia's  Ebole district, killing 74 people.
Revised:  Government troops launched a fierce offensive against the ONLF in early 2007 after the rebels attacked a Chinese-owned oil exploration field in Ethiopia's Ebole district, killing 74 people.
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Original:  Government troops launched a fierce offensive against the ONLF in early 2007 after the rebels attacked a Chinese owned oil exploration field in Ethiopia's  Ebole district, killing 74 people.
Revised:  Government troops launched a fierce offensive against the ONLF in early 2007 after the rebels attacked a Chinese owned oil exploration field in Ethiopia's w: Ebole district, killing 74 people.
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Original:  The ONLF has been fighting for greater autonomy or independence for the Ogaden since Ethiopia seized the mostly Somali speaking region in a war with Somalia more than 30 years ago
Revised:  The ONLF has been fighting for greater autonomy or independence for the Ogaden since Ethiopia seized the mostly Somali-speaking region in a war with Somalia more than 30 years ago
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Original:  An rebel communiqué issued on Friday said the rebels had captured seven towns along the border with Somalia.
Revised:  A rebel communiqué issued on Friday said the rebels had captured seven towns along the border with Somalia.
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Original: Government troops launched a fierce offensive against the ONLF in early 2007 after the rebels attacked a Chinese-owned oil exploration field in Ethiopia's w: Ebole district, killing 74 people.
Revised: Government troops launched a fierce offensive against the ONLF in early 2007 after the rebels attacked a Chinese-owned oil exploration field in Ethiopia's Ebole district, killing 74 people.
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Original:  "Over half the internet users around the world don't use a Latin-based script as their native language," commented Rod Beckstrom, president of the ICANN. "IDNs are about making the internet more global and accessible for everyone.   
Revised:  "Over half the internet users around the world don't use a Latin-based script as their native language," commented Rod Beckstrom, president of the ICANN. "IDNs are about making the internet more global and accessible for everyone. " 
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Original: JPG|Tarek Kamel addressing the 2009 Internet Governance Forum]]Egyptian Communication and Information Technology Minister Tarek Kamel announced on Sunday that the country had filed an application and that registration for the ".misr" (".Egypt") top-level domain name (مصر‎ in Arabic) would begin as of midnight (2200 UTC) at an Internet conference sponsored by the United Nations.
Revised: JPG|Tarek Kamel addressing the 2009 Internet Governance Forum]]Egyptian Communication and Information Technology Minister Tarek Kamel announced on Sunday that the country had filed an application and that registrations for domains in the ".misr" (".Egypt") top-level domain name (مصر‎ in Arabic) would begin as of midnight (2200 UTC) at an Internet conference sponsored by the United Nations.
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