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Original:  The only exception is the besieged capital of Mogadishu, which is protected primarily by UN peacekeepers and other foreign troops.
Revised:  The only exception is the besieged capital of Mogadishu, which is protected primarily by UN peace-keepers and other foreign troops.
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Original: Paul and Rachel Chandler disappeared on October 23, 2009, while in the Gulf of Aden off the coast of Somalia while en  from the Seychelles to Tanzania.
Revised: Paul and Rachel Chandler disappeared on October 23, 2009, while in the Gulf of Aden off the coast of Somalia while en route from the Seychelles to Tanzania.
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Original:  Instead, filling this power gap are Islamic extremist groups, such as al-Shabaab, as well as various warlords and pirate gangs which control most of the nation.
Revised:  Islamic extremist groups, such as al-Shabaab, as well as various warlords and pirate gangs which control most of the nation.
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Original:  Instead, filling this power gap are Islamic extremist groups, such as al-Shabaab, as well as various warlords and pirate gangs which control most of the nation.
Revised:  Instead, filling this power gap are Islamic extremist groups, such as al-Shabaab, as well as various warlords and pirate gangs control most of the nation.
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Original: The validly of all these threats are not known.
Revised: The validly of these threats are not known.
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Original:  According to the interviews, the couple pleaded for help and alleged that they have been "physically attacked," separated " and "treated as captive animal s " in solitary confinement at the hands of their captors.
Revised:  According to the interviews, the couple pleaded for help and alleged that they have been "physically attacked," separated and "treated as captive animal s " in solitary confinement at the hands of their captors.
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Original:  According to the interviews, the couple pleaded for help and alleged that they have been "physically attacked," separated " and "treated as captive animal s " in solitary confinement at the hands of their captors.
Revised:  According to the interviews, the couple pleaded for help and alleged that they have been "physically attacked," separated " and "treated as s " in solitary confinement at the hands of their captors.
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Original: The validly of these threats are not known.
Revised: The validity of these threats are not known.
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Original:  Alan Johnson in 2007 "The Joint Terrorism Analysis Centre has raised the threat [...] from 'substantial' to 'severe'.
Revised:  File photograph of Alan Johnson, taken in 2007 "The Joint Terrorism Analysis Centre has raised the threat [...] from 'substantial' to 'severe'.
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Original: ﻿  U.S. Army's 113th Battalion, which is made up of w:Indiana National Guardsman, discovered five-year-old Zia after a propane explosion in suburban Kabul earlier this year destroyed homes and killed killed six of trhe boy's family members.
Revised: ﻿ ? U.S. Army's 113th Battalion, which is made up of w:Indiana National Guardsman, discovered five-year-old Zia after a propane explosion in suburban Kabul earlier this year destroyed homes and killed killed six of trhe boy's family members.
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Original: ﻿  U.S. Army's 113th Battalion, which is made up of w:Indiana National Guardsman, discovered five-year-old Zia after a propane explosion in suburban Kabul earlier this year destroyed homes and killed killed six of trhe boy's family members.
Revised: ﻿ U.S. Army's 113th Battalion, which is made up of w:Indiana National Guardsman, discovered five-year-old Zia after a propane explosion in suburban Kabul earlier this year destroyed homes and killed six of the boy's family members.
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Original:  It left Zia with third degree burns  on his arms, torso and legs.
Revised:  It left Zia with third degree burns s on his arms, torso and legs.
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Original:  Guardsmen, familiar with the Fort Wayne burn center, worked with non-profit group, Northeast Indiana Burn Council to rasie $18,500 to fly Zia, accompanied by his father Abdul Qahir, to Fort Wayne for treatment.
Revised:  Guardsmen, familiar with the Fort Wayne burn center, worked with non-profit group, Northeast Indiana Burn Council to raised $18,500 to fly Zia, accompanied by his father Abdul Qahir, to Fort Wayne for treatment.
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Original:  In preparation for their planned return trip to Afghanistan in September, doctors are teaching Zia's father physical therapy techniques needed for furrther recovery.
Revised:  In preparation for their planned return trip to Afghanistan in September, doctors are teaching Zia's father physical therapy techniques needed for further recovery.
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Original: ]] The United Nations has announced that the government of Haiti has put an end to its efforts to rescue survivors of the earthquake that hit the region eleven days ago are over .
Revised: ]] The United Nations has announced that the government of Haiti has put an end to its efforts to rescue survivors of the earthquake that hit the region eleven days ago .
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Original: The magnitude 7 earthquake is estimated to have made 1.5 million people homeless, and some estimations of the death toll rise as high as high as 200,000.
Revised: The magnitude 7 earthquake is estimated to have made 1.5 million people homeless, and some estimations of the death toll rise as high as 200,000.
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Original: TD Banknorth, which is 51\% owned by the TD Financial group , has come to a deal with the Hudson United Bancorp.
Revised: TD Banknorth, which is 51\% owned by the TD Financial Group , has come to a deal with the Hudson United Bancorp.
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Original:  The acquisition has greatly increased TD's influence in America.
Revised:  The acquisition will greatly increased TD's influence in America.
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Original:  In total this will give TD 590 branches, 751 banking machines and more than $ 26-billion U.S. in deposits across eight northeastern states.
Revised:  In total this will give TD 590 branches, 751 banking machines and more than $ 26-billion in deposits across eight northeastern states.
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Original:  The acquisition will greatly increased TD's influence in America   .
Revised:  The acquisition will greatly increased TD's influence in America . .
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Original:  The flight had made an early landing , due to severe weather  and a ill passenger.
Revised:  The flight had made an early landing due to severe weather and a ill passenger.
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Original:  No fatalities have been reported, although 46 people have been injured , out of 157 passengers and 13 crew  aboard.
Revised:  No fatalities have been reported, although 46 people were injured out of 157 passengers and 13 crew aboard.
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Original:  No fatalities have been reported, although 46 people have been injured , out of 157 passengers and 13 crew  aboard.
Revised:  No fatalities have been reported, although 46 people have been injured , out of 157 passengers and 13 crew members aboard.
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Original:  No fatalitieshave been reported, although 46 people were injured out of 157 passengers and 13 crew members aboard.
Revised:  There were no fatalities. 46 people were injured out of 157 passengers and 13 crew members aboard.
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Original:  The plane  involved in the accident was a Tupolev Tu-154 with tail number RA-85787, built in the former Soviet Union.
Revised:  The plane The plane involved in the accident was a Tupolev Tu-154 with tail number RA-85787, built in the former Soviet Union.
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Original:  The Iranian Civil Aviation Authority has suspended Taban Air's license   
Revised:  The Iranian Civil Aviation Authority has suspended Taban Air's license . 
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Original:  168 died when w: Caspian Airlines Flight 7908 crashed, and 80 died earlier in 2009.
Revised:  168 died when Caspian Airlines Flight 7908 crashed, and 80 died earlier in 2009.
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Original: The Iranian Civil Aviation Authority has suspended Taban Air's license .
Revised: The Iranian Civil Aviation Authority has suspended Taban Air's license 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% U.S. sanctions against Iran have prevented its airlines buying Western airplanes
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  The flight was scheduled to fly from Abadan to Mashhad, but it made an early landing due to severe weather at the destination and a ill passenger.
Revised:  The flight was scheduled to fly from Abadan to Mashhad, but it made an early landing due to severe weather at the destination and an ill passenger.
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Original:  A third train then slammed into carriages derailed from the first crash.
Revised:  Almost immediately after a third train slammed into carriages derailed from the first crash.
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Original:   The incident is blamed on the driver of the Karachi train who reportedly misread a signal   .
Revised:  The incident is blamed on the driver of the Karachi train who reportedly misread a signal . .
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Original:  It is Pakistan's worst train accident since December 1989 when a crash near Sangi , about 35 miles (56 kilometres ) from today's crash site, killed over 400 people
Revised:  It is Pakistan's worst train accident since December 1989 when a crash near Sangi , about 35 (56 kilometres ) from today's crash site, killed over 400 people
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Original:  It is Pakistan's worst train accident since December 1989 when a crash near Sangi , about 35 miles (56 kilometres ) from today's crash site, killed over 400 people
Revised:  It is Pakistan's worst train accident since December 1989 when a crash near Sangi , about 35 miles (56 ) from today's crash site, killed over 400 people
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Original:  He was also famous for creating the marketing slogan for the television channel Dave , which goes like this : "Everybody knows a bloke called Dave."
Revised:  He was also famous for creating the marketing slogan for the television channel Dave : "Everybody knows a bloke called Dave."
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Original:  Al-Qaeda head Osama Bin Laden has released a new audio tape in which he delivers a message he describes as from "Osama to Obama".
Revised: Osama Bin Laden Al-Qaeda head Osama Bin Laden has released a new audio tape in which he delivers a message he describes as from "Osama to Obama".
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Original:  In the tape, aired by al-Jazeera, Bin Laden describes Umar Farouq Abdulmutallab, who tried to blow up a US airliner on Christmas day, as "a hero" who was reaffirmin the message of the September 11 attacks.
Revised:  In the tape, aired by al-Jazeera, Bin Laden describes Umar Farouq Abdulmutallab, who tried to blow up a US airliner on Christmas day, as "a hero" who was reaffirming the message of the September 11 attacks.
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Original: Osama Bin Laden Al-Qaeda head Osama Bin Laden has released a new audio tape in which he delivers a message he describes as from "Osama to Obama".
Revised: Osama Bin Laden Al-Qaeda 's notional leader Osama Bin Laden has released a new audio tape in which he delivers a message he describes as from "Osama to Obama".
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Original:  Osama's message to Obama, in Arabic  He tells the US President, as well as his public, that American foreign policy will have to change before he will cease his campaign against the nation.
Revised:  Osama's message to Obama, in Arabic . He tells the US President, as well as his public, that American foreign policy will have to change before he will cease his campaign against the nation.
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Original:  "It is unfair you enjoy a safe life while our brothers in Gaza suffer greatly  ...
Revised:  "It is unfair you enjoy a safe life while our brothers in Gaza suffer greatly , ...
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Original:  The West has yet to formally identify the tape as Bin Laden, but it is believed the tape represents Osama's first public anouncement since September 25 when he sought troop withdrawal from Afghanistan
Revised:  The West has yet to formally identify the tape as Bin Laden, but it is believed the tape represents Osama's first public announcement since September 25 when he sought troop withdrawal from Afghanistan
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Original: File photo from Osama Bin Laden wanted poster Al-Qaeda's notional leader Osama Bin Laden has released a new audio tape in which he delivers a message he describes as from "Osama to Obama".
Revised:  Osama Bin Laden wanted poster Al-Qaeda's notional leader Osama Bin Laden has released a new audio tape in which he delivers a message he describes as from "Osama to Obama".
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Original: File photo from Osama Bin Laden wanted poster Al-Qaeda's notional leader Osama Bin Laden has released a new audio tape in which he delivers a message he describes as from "Osama to Obama".
Revised: File photo from Osama Bin Laden Al-Qaeda's notional leader Osama Bin Laden has released a new audio tape in which he delivers a message he describes as from "Osama to Obama".
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Original: Minister Marie-Laurence Jocelyn Lassegue commented that the figure was based on corpses found and collected in the city by a state company, CNE. "Nobody knows how many bodies are buried in the rubble - 200,000, 300,000?
Revised: Minister Marie-Laurence Jocelyn Lassegue commented that the figure is based on corpses found and collected in the city by a state company, CNE. "Nobody knows how many bodies are buried in the rubble - 200,000, 300,000?
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Original:  Lassegue said, as quoted by the Associated Press .
Revised:  the Associate Press reports Lassegue's remarks
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Original:  Yesterday, the United Nations reported that the Haitian government found 111,481 bodies were recovered from rubble.
Revised:  Yesterday, the United Nations reported the Haitian government found 111,481 bodies were recovered from rubble.
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Original:  Yesterday, the United Nations reported that the Haitian government found 111,481 bodies were recovered from rubble.
Revised:  Yesterday, the United Nations reported that the Haitian government found 111,481 bodies recovered from rubble.
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Original:  The government officially announced on Saturday that its search for survivors buried beneath buildings had ended, and was focussing instead on getting aid to survivors.
Revised:  The government officially announced on Saturday that its search for survivors buried beneath buildings had ended, and the focus is now instead on getting aid to survivors.
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Original:  Who knows the overall death toll?" the Associate Press reports Lassegue 's remarks Yesterday, the United Nations reported the Haitian government found 111,481 bodies recovered from rubble.
Revised:  Who knows the overall death toll?" the Associated Press reports Lassegue 's remarks Yesterday, the United Nations reported the Haitian government found 111,481 bodies recovered from rubble.
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Original:  Who knows the overall death toll?" the Associate Press reports Lassegue 's remarks Yesterday, the United Nations reported the Haitian government found 111,481 bodies recovered from rubble.
Revised:  Who knows the overall death toll?" the Associate Press reports Lassegue as commenting. Yesterday, the United Nations reported the Haitian government found 111,481 bodies recovered from rubble.
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Original:  The government officially announced on Saturday that its search for survivors buried beneath buildings had ended , and the focus is now instead on getting aid to survivors.
Revised:  The government officially announced on Saturday that its search for survivors buried beneath buildings had ended ; and, the focus is now instead on getting aid to survivors.
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Original:  and, the focus is now instead on getting aid to survivors.
Revised:  the focus is now instead on getting aid to survivors.
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Original:  and, the focus is now instead on getting aid to survivors.
Revised:  and, the focus is now on getting aid to survivors.
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Original:  Banks have reopened in Haiti for the first time since the earthquake that killed an estimated 110,000 people acoording to Voice of America, however according to the Haitian minister, 150,000 are dead .
Revised:  Banks in Haiti have reopened for the first time since the earthquake that killed an estimated 110,000 people acoording to Voice of America, however according to the Haitian minister, 150,000 are dead .
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Original:  Banks have reopened in Haiti for the first time since the earthquake that killed an estimated 110,000 people acoording to Voice of America, however according to the Haitian minister, 150,000 are dead .
Revised:  Banks have reopened in Haiti for the first time since the earthquake .
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Original:  Private banks are allowing withdrawals equivalent to 2,500 Haitian gourdes (  about US$63 or £29).
Revised:  Private banks are allowing withdrawals of up to 2,500 Haitian gourdes ( about US$63 or £29).
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Original:  Private banks are allowing withdrawals equivalent to 2,500 Haitian gourdes (  about US$63 or £29).
Revised:  Private banks are allowing withdrawals equivalent to 2,500 Haitian gourdes ( equivalent to about US$63 or £29).
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Original:  Citi , a New York bank, lost its locations due to the earthquake's devastation.
Revised:  Citibank , a New York bank, lost its locations due to the earthquake's devastation.
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Original:  We at Citi were no exception, having lost five of our dear employees...  
Revised:  We at Citi were no exception, having lost five of our dear employees... " 
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Original:  We at Citi were no exception, having lost five of our dear employees. .." As Haitians flood into the banks and transfer offices, transactions are taking up to 10 hours.
Revised:  We at Citi were no exception, having lost five of our dear employees. As Haitians flood into the banks and transfer offices, transactions are taking up to 10 hours.
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Original:  He commented that the allegedattackers escaped following the shooting.
Revised:  He commented that the alleged attackers escaped following the shooting.
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Original:  The Yemeni al-Qaeda said that it had armed the man accused of trying to blow the plane up, a Nigerian   .
Revised:  The Yemeni al-Qaeda said that it had armed the man accused of trying to blow the plane up, a Nigerian . .
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Original:  The tiles provide vital protection to the Orbiter as it makes its firey re-entry to Earth's atmosphere.
Revised:  The tiles provide vital protection to the Orbiter as it makes its fiery re-entry to Earth's atmosphere.
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Original:  The chance of a weather-related delay to the launch has increased to 40\% - due to the possibility of thunderstorms in the area  
Revised:  The chance of a weather-related delay to the launch has increased to 40\% - due to the possibility of thunderstorms in the area . 
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Original:  The chance of a weather-related delay to the launch has increased to 40\% - due to the possibility of thunderstorms in the area .
Revised:  The chance of a weather-related delay to the launch has increased to 40\% - due to the possibility of thunderstorms in the area 
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Original: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia An 19-year man has been caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour (km/h) in an 80 km/h zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
Revised: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia An 19-year man was caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour (km/h) in an 80 km/h zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
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Original:  TMU officers pulled the drivers Ford XR6 at 11:00pm on the January 23.
Revised:  TMU officers pulled the driver's Ford XR6 at 11:00pm on the January 23.
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Original:  The drivers vehicle was impounded for 48 hours while his licence will be suspended for 12 months
Revised:  The drivers vehicle was impounded for 48 hours while his license will be suspended for 12 months
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Original: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia An 19-year man was caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour (km/h) in an 80 km/h zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
Revised: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia A 19-year man was caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour (km/h) in an 80 km/h zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
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Original:  TMU officers pulled  the driver's Ford XR6 at 11:00pm on the January 23.
Revised:  TMU officers pulled over the driver's Ford XR6 at 11:00pm on the January 23.
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Original:  The drivers vehicle was impounded for 48 hours while his license will be suspended for 12 months
Revised:  The vehicle was impounded for 48 hours while his license will be suspended for 12 months
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Original: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia A 19-year man was caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour ( km/h ) in an 80 km/h zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
Revised: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia A nineteen-year-old man was caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour ( km/h ) in an 80 km/h zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
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Original: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia A 19-year man was caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour ( km/h ) in an 80 km/h zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
Revised: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia A 19-year man was caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour ( kph ) in an 80 km/h zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
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Original: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia A 19-year man was caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour ( km/h ) in an 80 km/h zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
Revised: Traralgons location in Victoria, Australia A 19-year man was caught driving at 191 kilometres an hour ( km/h ) in an 80 kph zone in Traralgon, Victoria, Australia.
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Original:  “ Police observed the Ford XR6 travelling east along the Princess Highway Traralgon at 11.00 pm last night at 191 km in an 80 zone.
Revised:  " Police observed the Ford XR6 travelling east along the Princess Highway Traralgon at 11.00 pm last night at 191 km in an 80 zone.
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Original:  “ Police observed the Ford XR6 travelling east along the Princess Highway Traralgon at 11.00 pm last night at 191 km in an 80 zone.
Revised:  “ Police observed the Ford XR6 travelling east along the Princess Highway Traralgon at 11:00pm last night at 191 km in an 80 zone.
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Original:  “ Police observed the Ford XR6 travelling east along the Princess Highway Traralgon at 11.00 pm last night at 191 km in an 80 zone.
Revised:  “ Police observed the Ford XR6 travelling east along the Princess Highway Traralgon at 11.00 pm last night at 191kph in an 80kph zone.
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Original:  The young man who had his 16 year old girlfriend in the car with him had his licence for only 14 months ” , police said.
Revised:  The young man who had his 16 year old girlfriend in the car with him had his licence for only 14 months " , police said.
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Original:  The vehicle was impounded for 48 hours while his license will be suspended for 12 months
Revised:  The vehicle was impounded for 48 hours while his license will be suspended for twelve months
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Original: At least six people have been wounded after a shooting ambush near a gold and copper mine in Indonesia earlier today . , according to police reports.
Revised: At least six people have been wounded after a shooting ambush near a gold and copper mine in Indonesia earlier today , according to police reports.
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