wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   "Leisure and idleness in the Renaissance: the ambivalence of otium" by Brian Vickers , p. 6  The first recorded use of the term is in a fragment from a soldiers' chorus in Ennius' Iphigenia (c. 190 BC), whose preservation we owe to that philologian's ragbag, the Attic Nights of Aulus Gellius (c. 150 AD) – he cites it as an example of the usage of the word praeterpropter (19.10.12).
Revised:  Brian Vickers, "Leisure and idleness in the Renaissance: the ambivalence of otium" by Brian Vickers , p. 6 The first recorded use of the term is in a fragment from a soldiers' chorus in Ennius' Iphigenia (c. 190 BC), whose preservation we owe to that philologian's ragbag, the Attic Nights of Aulus Gellius (c. 150 AD) – he cites it as an example of the usage of the word praeterpropter (19.10.12).
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Original:   "Leisure and idleness in the Renaissance: the ambivalence of otium" by Brian Vickers , p. 6  The first recorded use of the term is in a fragment from a soldiers' chorus in Ennius' Iphigenia (c. 190 BC), whose preservation we owe to that philologian's ragbag, the Attic Nights of Aulus Gellius (c. 150 AD) – he cites it as an example of the usage of the word praeterpropter (19.10.12).
Revised:  "Leisure and idleness in the Renaissance: the ambivalence of otium" , p. 6 The first recorded use of the term is in a fragment from a soldiers' chorus in Ennius' Iphigenia (c. 190 BC), whose preservation we owe to that philologian's ragbag, the Attic Nights of Aulus Gellius (c. 150 AD) – he cites it as an example of the usage of the word praeterpropter (19.10.12).
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Original:   "Leisure and idleness in the Renaissance: the ambivalence of otium" by Brian Vickers , p. 6  The first recorded use of the term is in a fragment from a soldiers' chorus in Ennius' Iphigenia (c. 190 BC), whose preservation we owe to that philologian's ragbag, the Attic Nights of Aulus Gellius (c. 150 AD) – he cites it as an example of the usage of the word praeterpropter (19.10.12).
Revised:  "Leisure and idleness in the Renaissance: the ambivalence of otium" by Brian Vickers , p. 6 " The first recorded use of the term is in a fragment from a soldiers' chorus in Ennius' Iphigenia (c. 190 BC), whose preservation we owe to that philologian's ragbag, the Attic Nights of Aulus Gellius (c. 150 AD) – he cites it as an example of the usage of the word praeterpropter (19.10.12).
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Original:   The oldest citation for otium is this chorus of soldiers, singing about idleness on campaign, in an otherwise lost Latin tragedy by Ennius.
Revised:  " The oldest citation for otium is this chorus of soldiers, singing about idleness on campaign, in an otherwise lost Latin tragedy by Ennius.
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Original: Andre, p. 17 Its military origin meant to stop fighting in battle and laying down of the weaponsBernard, p. 16 – a time for peace.
Revised: Andre, p. 17 Its military origin meant to stop fighting in battle and lay down weaponsBernard, p. 16 – a time for peace.
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Original: The Imperial Roman poet Statius writes of a "otium villa" that he planned to retire to in Naples in his work Silvae:  It has secure peace, an idle life of leisure, non-troubled rest and sleep.
Revised: The Imperial Roman poet Statius writes of a "otium villa" that he planned to retire to in Naples in his work Silvae: " It has secure peace, an idle life of leisure, non-troubled rest and sleep.
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Original:   Statius, Silvae 3.5.85–87 Pliny the Younger exemplified the philosophy of the Roman elite in otium of the time by the life he lived from his "otium villas".
Revised:  " Statius, Silvae 3.5.85–87 Pliny the Younger exemplified the philosophy of the Roman elite in otium of the time by the life he lived from his "otium villas".
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Original: Beck, pp. 43–44 He would share such a precious commodity with his best friends in the spirit of Seneca when he said "no good thing is pleasant to possess without friends to share it . "  Kleist, p. 136
Revised: Beck, pp. 43–44 He would share such a precious commodity with his best friends in the spirit of Seneca when he said "no good thing is pleasant to possess without friends to share it " Kleist, p. 136
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Original: Beck, pp. 43–44 He would share such a precious commodity with his best friends in the spirit of Seneca when he said "no good thing is pleasant to possess without friends to share it . "  Kleist, p. 136
Revised: Beck, pp. 43–44 He would share such a precious commodity with his best friends in the spirit of Seneca when he said "no good thing is pleasant to possess without friends to share it . " . Kleist, p. 136
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Original:  It originally had the idea of withdrawing from one's daily business ( negotium = neg-otium) or affairs to engage in activities that were considered to be artistically valuable or enlightening (i.e. speaking, writing, philosophy).
Revised:  It originally had the idea of withdrawing from one's daily business ( neg-otium) or affairs to engage in activities that were considered to be artistically valuable or enlightening (i.e. speaking, writing, philosophy).
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Original:  Researches have determined the etymological and semantic use of otium was never a direct translation of the Greek word "schole", but derived from specifically Roman contexts.
Revised:  Researchers have determined the etymological and semantic use of otium was never a direct translation of the Greek word "schole", but derived from specifically Roman contexts.
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Original: Crew His crew consisted of the following: Dr. Frederick Albert Cook, surgeon and ethnologist John M. Verhoeff, mineralogist and meteorologist Langdon Gibson, ornithologist Matthew Alexander Henson, Eivind Astrup Josephine Diebitsch Peary, who was Peary's wife Relief expedition: Angelo Heilprin, curator of the Philadelphia Academy of Natural Sciences, Henry G. Bryant He was accompanied by Professors Benjamin Sharp and J. F. Holt, both zoologists from the academy.
Revised: Crew His crew consisted of the following: Dr. Frederick Albert Cook, surgeon and ethnologist John M. Verhoeff, mineralogist and meteorologist Langdon Gibson, ornithologist Matthew Alexander Henson, Eivind Astrup Josephine Diebitsch Peary, who was Peary's wife He was accompanied by Professors Benjamin Sharp and J. F. Holt, both zoologists from the academy.
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Original: Wholesale Sports offers equipment, clothing and accessories in the camping, hunting, and fishing categories to outdoor enthusiasts across western Canada.
Revised: Wholesale Sports offered equipment, clothing and accessories in the camping, hunting, and fishing categories to outdoor enthusiasts across western Canada.
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Original:  Founded by two brothers from Calgary, they acquired local retailers including Frenchy's and Barottos Sports  establishing Wholesale Sports as a retailer and distributor to western Canada's sportsmen and women.
Revised:  Founded by two brothers from Calgary, they acquired local retailers including Frenchy's and Barottos Sports , establishing Wholesale Sports as a retailer and distributor to western Canada's sportsmen and women.
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Original:  Sportsman’s Warehouse, a privately held Salt Lake City-based , outdoor adventure retailer, had 68 locations throughout the U.S. before UFA acquired 15 sites.
Revised:  Sportsman’s Warehouse, a privately held Salt Lake City-based outdoor adventure retailer, had 68 locations throughout the U.S. before UFA acquired 15 sites.
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Original: Wholesale Sports Outdoor Outfitters was a Canadian owned and operated retailer in western Canada of hunting, fishing  and camping gear and apparel, that provided advice and merchandise for outdoor sports and activities.
Revised: Wholesale Sports Outdoor Outfitters was a Canadian owned and operated retailer in western Canada that provided hunting, fishing and camping gear and apparel, that provided advice and merchandise for outdoor sports and activities.
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Original: Wholesale Sports Outdoor Outfitters was a Canadian owned and operated retailer in western Canada of hunting, fishing  and camping gear and apparel, that provided advice and merchandise for outdoor sports and activities.
Revised: Wholesale Sports Outdoor Outfitters was a Canadian owned and operated retailer in western Canada of hunting, fishing , and camping gear and apparel, that provided advice and merchandise for outdoor sports and activities.
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Original: Wholesale Sports Outdoor Outfitters was a Canadian owned and operated retailer in western Canada of hunting, fishing  and camping gear and apparel, that provided advice and merchandise for outdoor sports and activities.
Revised: Wholesale Sports Outdoor Outfitters was a Canadian owned and operated retailer in western Canada of hunting, fishing and camping gear and apparel, and advice and merchandise for outdoor sports and activities.
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Original:  Last business day of retail sales before closing permanently will be December 28, 2017.
Revised:  Last business day of retail sales before closing permanently was on December 28, 2017.
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Original:  The research conducted at Pusilhá began at the biginning of the 20th century and contiunes to this day.
Revised:  The research conducted at Pusilhá began at the biginning of the 20th century and continues to this day.
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Original: Pusilhá has a series of confirmed occupation date .
Revised: Pusilhá has a series of confirmed occupation dates .
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Original:  A stelae found on site indicates a late classic occupation.
Revised:  A stela found on site indicates a late classic occupation.
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Original:  The location of this Late Classic Maya urban complex along the east and west flow of trade afford archaeologist a historical view of a secondary Maya site.
Revised:  The location of this Late Classic Mayan urban complex, along the east and west flow of trade afford archaeologist a historical view of a secondary Maya site.
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Original: British Museum Collection </blockquote> The survey yielded dates and calendrical glyphs that were included in Sylvanus G. Morley's discussion work The Inscriptions of Petén.
Revised: British Museum Collection The survey yielded dates and calendrical glyphs that were included in Sylvanus G. Morley's discussion work The Inscriptions of Petén.
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Original:  All total there are 39 named individuals that have been discovered by the epigraphers in the hieroglyphic record.
Revised:  In total there are 39 named individuals that have been discovered by the epigraphers in the hieroglyphic record.
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Original:  The location of this Late Classic Mayan urban complex, along the east and west flow of trade, made the city a major transfer point for economic activities in the whole region.
Revised:  The location of this Late Classic Maya urban complex, along the east and west flow of trade, made the city a major transfer point for economic activities in the whole region.
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Original:  In addition, the city gave archaeologists a historical view of a secondary Mayan site.
Revised:  In addition, the city gave archaeologists a historical view of a secondary Maya site.
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Original: Racism, Sexism, and Poverty People are drawn to capitalism with the promise of choice, but as Galeano points out, those who are allowed to actually make those choices are limited oftentimes by money, gender, and race.
Revised: Racism, Sexism, and Poverty People are drawn to capitalism with the promise of choice, but as Galeano points out, those who are allowed to actually make those choices are limited often by money, gender, and race.
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Original:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> these exiles, in particular, may have been formative in Galeano's life and writing.
Revised:  Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> these exiles, in particular, may have been formative in Galeano's life and writing.
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Original:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> these exiles, in particular, may have been formative in Galeano's life and writing.
Revised:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> these exiles, in particular, may have been formative in Galeano's life and writing.
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Original:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> these exiles, in particular, may have been formative in Galeano's life and writing.
Revised:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World , Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> these exiles, in particular, may have been formative in Galeano's life and writing.
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Original:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> these exiles, in particular, may have been formative in Galeano's life and writing.
Revised:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) these exiles, in particular, may have been formative in Galeano's life and writing.
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Original: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.337, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> The method of questioning also forces his readers to critically analyze themselves and their roles in these power dynamics.
Revised: Galeano, Eduardo, Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.337, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> The method of questioning also forces his readers to critically analyze themselves and their roles in these power dynamics.
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Original: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.337, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> The method of questioning also forces his readers to critically analyze themselves and their roles in these power dynamics.
Revised: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World , p.337, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> The method of questioning also forces his readers to critically analyze themselves and their roles in these power dynamics.
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Original: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.337, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> The method of questioning also forces his readers to critically analyze themselves and their roles in these power dynamics.
Revised: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.337, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) The method of questioning also forces his readers to critically analyze themselves and their roles in these power dynamics.
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Original:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.7, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998)  Further distinguishing between the social classes, he explains that rich children in Latin America never experience the city they live in;
Revised:  Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.7, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) Further distinguishing between the social classes, he explains that rich children in Latin America never experience the city they live in;
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Original:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.7, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998)  Further distinguishing between the social classes, he explains that rich children in Latin America never experience the city they live in;
Revised:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.7, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Further distinguishing between the social classes, he explains that rich children in Latin America never experience the city they live in;
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Original:   Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
Revised:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
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Original:   Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
Revised:  Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
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Original:   Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
Revised:  Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
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Original:   Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
Revised:  Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
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Original:   Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
Revised:  Galeano, Eduardo, "Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World", p.12, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> Poor children, on the other hand, are "dodging real bullets" <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World , p.13, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) and "little slaves in the family economy of in the informal sector of the global economy".
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Original: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.14, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> In Latin American society, poor children are seen as potential disasters after they are victimized in child labor, the sex trade and sweat shop labor.
Revised: Galeano, Eduardo, Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.14, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> In Latin American society, poor children are seen as potential disasters after they are victimized in child labor, the sex trade and sweat shop labor.
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Original: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.14, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> In Latin American society, poor children are seen as potential disasters after they are victimized in child labor, the sex trade and sweat shop labor.
Revised: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World , p.14, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> In Latin American society, poor children are seen as potential disasters after they are victimized in child labor, the sex trade and sweat shop labor.
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Original: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.14, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) </ref> In Latin American society, poor children are seen as potential disasters after they are victimized in child labor, the sex trade and sweat shop labor.
Revised: Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.14, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) In Latin American society, poor children are seen as potential disasters after they are victimized in child labor, the sex trade and sweat shop labor.
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Original:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.15, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) Meanwhile, the children that lie somewhere between rich and poor taught the "fear of living, fear of falling, fear of losing your job, your car, your home, your possessions, fear of never having what you ought to have in order to be".
Revised:  Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.15, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) Meanwhile, the children that lie somewhere between rich and poor taught the "fear of living, fear of falling, fear of losing your job, your car, your home, your possessions, fear of never having what you ought to have in order to be".
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Original:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, " Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.15, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) Meanwhile, the children that lie somewhere between rich and poor taught the "fear of living, fear of falling, fear of losing your job, your car, your home, your possessions, fear of never having what you ought to have in order to be".
Revised:  <ref> Galeano, Eduardo, Upside Down: A Primer for the Looking-Glass World " , p.15, Picador USA, New York, USA (1998) Meanwhile, the children that lie somewhere between rich and poor taught the "fear of living, fear of falling, fear of losing your job, your car, your home, your possessions, fear of never having what you ought to have in order to be".
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