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Original:  Mr. Bush used his weekly radio address to call on the Senate to formally define marriage as a "union between a man and a woman" .
Revised:  Mr. Bush formally defined marriage as a "union between a man and a woman" .
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Original:   An amendment such as this one stands little chance of being passed but according to a BBC report, analysts assert it will be a vote-winner for the Republicans during the mid-term polls in November.
Revised:  An amendment such as one to ban gay marriage may not be passed but some assert this will be a vote-winner for the Republicans during the mid-term polls in November.
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Original:  They claim the President is trying to focus attention on the positive aspects of his party at a time when his popularity is at a low, mainly because of the war in Iraq  . President Bush stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.”
Revised:  The President may be able to focus attention on the positive aspects of his party at a time when his popularity is at a low, mainly because of the war in Iraq . President Bush stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.”
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Original:  They claim the President is trying to focus attention on the positive aspects of his party at a time when his popularity is at a low, mainly because of the war in Iraq  . President Bush stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.”
Revised:  They claim the President is trying to focus attention on a subject of his choosing at a time when his popularity is at a low, mainly because of the war in Iraq . President Bush stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.”
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Original:  They claim the President is trying to focus attention on the positive aspects of his party at a time when his popularity is at a low, mainly because of the war in Iraq  . President Bush stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.”
Revised:  They claim the President is trying to focus attention on the positive aspects of his party at a time when the war in Iraq . President Bush stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.”
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Original: The amendment would need a two-third support in both the House and the Senate  .
Revised: Any such amendment would need a two-third support in both the House and the Senate .
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Original: The amendment would need a two-third support in both the House and the Senate  .
Revised: The amendment would need two-thirds approval in the House of Representants (290 out of 435) and the Senate .
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Original: United States President , George W. Bush has used his weekly radio address to propose the country's Constitution be amended to ban same-sex marriages.
Revised: United States President George W. Bush has used his weekly radio address to propose the country's Constitution be amended to ban same-sex marriages.
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Original: United States President , George W. Bush has used his weekly radio address to propose the country's Constitution be amended to ban same-sex marriages.
Revised: United States President , George W. Bush used his weekly radio address to propose the country's Constitution be amended to ban same-sex marriages.
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Original:  Senate Minority Leader Harry Reid said : "Bush Republicans would rather focus on purely divisive maneuvers than real solutions that address the growing energy crisis."
Revised:  Senate Minority Leader Harry Reid said , "Bush Republicans would rather focus on purely divisive maneuvers than real solutions that address the growing energy crisis."
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Original:  An amendment such as one to ban gay marriage may not be passed but some assert this will be a vote-winner for the Republicans during the mid-term polls in November.
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Original:  President Bush stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.”
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Original:   Any such amendment would need two-thirds approval in the House of Representants (290 out of 435) and the Senate (67 out of 100) as well as the approval of three-fourths of the State Legislatures (38 out of 50).
Revised:  Any such amendment would need two-thirds approval in the House of Representatives (290 out of 435) and the Senate (67 out of 100) as well as the approval of three-fourths of the State Legislatures (38 out of 50).
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Original:   Any such amendment would need two-thirds approval in the House of Representants (290 out of 435) and the Senate (67 out of 100) as well as the approval of three-fourths of the State Legislatures (38 out of 50).
Revised:  Any such amendment would need two-thirds approval in the House of Representants (290 out of 435) and the Senate (67 out of 100) as well as the approval of three-fourths of the state legislatures (38 out of 50).
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Original:  Currently  the Republican Party holds 231 seats in the House , 55 seats in the Federal Senate, and  20 state Legislatures .
Revised:  Currently , the Republican Party holds 231 seats in the House , 55 seats in the Federal Senate, and 20 state Legislatures .
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Original:  Currently  the Republican Party holds 231 seats in the House , 55 seats in the Federal Senate, and  20 state Legislatures .
Revised:  Currently the Republican Party holds 231 seats in the House and 55 seats in the Federal Senate, and 20 state Legislatures .
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Original:  Currently  the Republican Party holds 231 seats in the House , 55 seats in the Federal Senate, and  20 state Legislatures .
Revised:  Currently the Republican Party holds 231 seats in the House , 55 seats in the Senate, and 20 state Legislatures .
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Original:  Currently  the Republican Party holds 231 seats in the House , 55 seats in the Federal Senate, and  20 state Legislatures .
Revised:  Currently the Republican Party holds 231 seats in the House , 55 seats in the Federal Senate, and 20 state legislatures .
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Original:  He also stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society. ”
Revised:  He also stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society. "
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Original:  The royally appointed guardian of the mountain, "Mbah" Maridjan, was reported to have led a silent procession of about 100 people on a march around a village near the volcano  
Revised:  The royally appointed guardian of the mountain, "Mbah" Maridjan, was reported to have led a silent procession of about 100 people on a march around a village near the volcano . 
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Original:  The royally appointed guardian of the mountain, "Mbah" Maridjan, was reported to have led a silent procession of about 100 people on a march around a village near the volcano  
Revised:  The royally appointed guardian of the mountain, "Mbah" Maridjan, was reported to have led a silent procession of about 100 people on a march around a village near the volcano Related new
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Original: Government geologist Subandriyo (who uses a single name) said that Merapi's lava dome has swelled 56 feet (17 m) in the past week to a height of 330 feet (100 m), raising fears that it could collapse and release a pyroclastic flow of hot gases and rock fragments burning everything in its path.
Revised: Government geologist Subandriyo said that Merapi's lava dome has swelled 56 feet (17 m) in the past week to a height of 330 feet (100 m), raising fears that it could collapse and release a pyroclastic flow of hot gases and rock fragments burning everything in its path.
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Original:  Since then, the region has experienced over one thousand aftershocks, most  weak but some  strong enough to jolt villagers awake .
Revised:  Since then, the region has experienced over one thousand aftershocks, most of which were weak but some strong enough to jolt villagers awake .
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Original:  Since then, the region has experienced over one thousand aftershocks, most  weak but some  strong enough to jolt villagers awake .
Revised:  Since then, the region has experienced over one thousand aftershocks, most weak but some were strong enough to jolt villagers awake .
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Original:  Since then, the region has experienced over one thousand aftershocks, most  weak but some  strong enough to jolt villagers awake .
Revised:  Since then, the region has experienced over one thousand aftershocks, most weak but some strong enough to jolt awake villagers in the area .
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% EasyJet traffic grows 23.8 pct - Reuters - 7 Feb 2005 Easyjet stills sees bumpy ride ahead - FT.com - 7 Feb 2005 Easyjet warns of uncertain outlook - The Guardian - 7 Feb 2005 Category:Economy and busine
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% EasyJet traffic grows 23.8 pct - Reuters - 7 Feb 2005 Easyjet stills sees bumpy ride ahead - FT.com - 7 Feb 2005 Easyjet warns of uncertain outlook - The Guardian - 7 Feb 2005 Category:Economy and busine
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% EasyJet traffic grows 23.8 pct - Reuters - 7 Feb 2005 Easyjet stills sees bumpy ride ahead - FT.com - 7 Feb 2005 Easyjet warns of uncertain outlook - The Guardian - 7 Feb 2005 Category:Economy and busine
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Economy and busine
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Original:  They are with the governor now [and are] looking very fine," said spokesman for  Bayelsa in southern Nigeria, Ekiyor Welson.
Revised:  They are with the governor now [and are] looking very fine," said spokesman for the state of Bayelsa in southern Nigeria, Ekiyor Welson.
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Original: Eight oil workers that were kidnapped and taken off a Bulford Dolphin oil platform off the coast of Nigeria on Friday have been freed.
Revised: Eight oil workers who were kidnapped from a Bulford Dolphin oil platform off the coast of Nigeria on Friday have been freed.
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Original:  That execution of serial killer occurred in 2005 by lethal injection  
Revised:  That execution of serial killer occurred in 2005 by lethal injection . 
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Original:  That execution of serial killer occurred in 2005 by lethal injection  
Revised:  That execution of serial killer occurred in 2005 by lethal injection "As our state moves beyond this divisive debate, I hope we can all redouble our efforts and common work to improve the fairness and integrity of our criminal justice system, and to minimize its fallibility," added Malloy
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Original: Only one person in Connecticut has been executed since 1976, when the U.S. government reinstated the death penalty after the  Supreme Court upheld capital punishment.
Revised: Only one person in Connecticut has been executed since 1976, when the U.S. government reinstated the death penalty after the U.S. Supreme Court upheld capital punishment.
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Original: In the United States, the state of Connecticut has repealed the death penalty, becoming the 17th state in the U.S. to do so.
Revised: In the United States, the state of Connecticut has repealed the death penalty, becoming the seventeenth state in the U.S. to do so.
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Original:  However, despite the state's decision, prisoners currently serving a death row sentence will still be executed as planned.
Revised:  However, despite the state's decision, prisoners currently serving a death row sentence are still set to be executed as planned.
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Original:  Currently in Connecticut, 11 prisoners are serving a death row sentence, all of them men.
Revised:  Currently in Connecticut, eleven prisoners are serving a death row sentence, all of them men.
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Original: The Press Association has exposed the scandal in which British airports have become key crossing points in slave markets .
Revised: The scandal in which British airports have become key crossing points in slave markets .
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Original:  Airports mentioned included Britain's "big three": Gatwick, Heathrow and Stansted .
Revised:  Airports mentioned included Britain's "big three": Gatwick, and .
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Original:  Tim Brain, the Gloucestershire chief constable in charge of an investigation called "Operation Pentameter," said there might be hundreds of foreign slaves living in Britain.
Revised:  , the chief constable in charge of an investigation called "Operation Pentameter," said there might be hundreds of foreign slaves living in Britain.
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Original:  The brothers, who are both Muslim and of Bangladeshi origin, are both still being questioned today at London's high-security Paddington Green Police Station.
Revised:  The brothers, who are both Muslim and of Bangladeshi origin, are being questioned today at London's high-security Paddington Green Police Station.
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Original:  As a result , there is still a considerable police presence at the residence, as well as a layer of sheeting surrounding the building.
Revised:  As a result , there is still a large police presence at the residence, as well as a layer of sheeting surrounding the building.
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Original:  In response to fears for their safety , police said that "nothing suspicious was found in an initial search of the house and that neighbours are not in danger."
Revised:  In response to safety fears , police said that "nothing suspicious was found in an initial search of the house and that neighbours are not in danger."
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Original: Simão came to reveal it self important for the win of the Portuguese team.
Revised: Simão came to reveal him self important for the win of the Portuguese team.
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Original: Portugal's nation team defeated Luxembourg by 3-0 yesterday, on this team last game of preparation for the 2006 World Cup.
Revised: Portugal's national team defeated the Luxembourgish team by 3-0 yesterday, on this team last game of preparation for the 2006 World Cup.
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Original: Portugal's nation team defeated Luxembourg by 3-0 yesterday, on this team last game of preparation for the 2006 World Cup.
Revised: Portugal's nation team defeated Luxembourg by 3-0 yesterday, in Portugal's last game in preparation for the 2006 World Cup.
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Original:  On the first part of the game, Scolari, the head coach of the team, used the same "eleven" that was used on the Euro 2004.
Revised:  In the first part of the game, Scolari, the head coach of the team, used the same "eleven" that was used on the Euro 2004.
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Original:  On the first part of the game, Scolari, the head coach of the team, used the same "eleven" that was used on the Euro 2004.
Revised:  On the first part of the game, Scolari, the head coach of the team, used the same "eleven" players that were used on the Euro 2004.
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Original:  At the interval , Scolari changed Deco, Costinha and Pauleta for Postiga, Petit and Simão.
Revised:  At halftime , Scolari changed Deco, Costinha and Pauleta for Postiga, Petit and Simão.
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Original:  Simão came to reveal him self important for the win of the Portuguese team.
Revised:  Simão was important for the win of the Portuguese team.
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Original:  After only some seconds on the game, the Benfica's player marked the first goal of the game.
Revised:  After a few seconds in the game, the Benfica's player marked the first goal of the game.
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Original:  After only some seconds on the game, the Benfica's player marked the first goal of the game.
Revised:  After only some seconds on the game, the Benfica's player scored the first goal of the game.
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Original:  At the 74º minute, Simão, marking a penalty kick , on the sequence of a foul committed against Figo, marked the second goal.
Revised:  At the 74th minute, Simão, marking a penalty kick , on the sequence of a foul committed against Figo, marked the second goal.
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Original:  At the 74º minute, Simão, marking a penalty kick , on the sequence of a foul committed against Figo, marked the second goal.
Revised:  At the 74º minute, Simão, taking a penalty kick , on the sequence of a foul committed against Figo, marked the second goal.
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Original:  At the 74º minute, Simão, marking a penalty kick , on the sequence of a foul committed against Figo, marked the second goal.
Revised:  At the 74º minute, Simão, marking a penalty kick as the result of a foul committed against Figo, marked the second goal.
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Original:  At the 74º minute, Simão, marking a penalty kick , on the sequence of a foul committed against Figo, marked the second goal.
Revised:  At the 74º minute, Simão, marking a penalty kick , on the sequence of a foul committed against Figo, scored the second goal.
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Original:  For last the team's captain, Figo, marked the last goal at the 84 minutes .
Revised:  The last goal was scored by the team's captain, Figo, marked the last goal at the 84 minutes .
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Original:  For last the team's captain, Figo, marked the last goal at the 84 minutes .
Revised:  For last the team's captain, Figo, in the 84th minute .
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Original:  On the Group D, Portugal and Angola will also face the national teams of Mexico and Iran
Revised:  In Group D, Portugal and Angola will also face the national teams of Mexico and Iran
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Original:  ACF President Professor Ian Lowe says "Nuclear is too dangerous, too dirty, too expensive and too slow to provide any legitimate answer to climate change or to energy security for the developing world."
Revised:  ACF President Professor Ian Lowe says "Nuclear is too slow to provide any legitimate answer to climate change or to energy security for the developing world."
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Original:  The ACF report that, as an energy source , globally, uranium provides less power than renewables do.
Revised:  The ACF report that, as an energy source globally, uranium provides less power than renewables do.
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Original: Mr  Carpenter said in a media release that the document mentions a site near Perth airport.
Revised: Mr . Carpenter said in a media release that the document mentions a site near Perth airport.
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Original: Mr . Carpenter said in a media release that the document mentions a site near Perth airport.
Revised: Mr Carpenter said in a media release that the document mentions a site near Perth airport.
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Original:  Mr . Howard said the ANSTO report challenged the view that the cost of nuclear power was prohibitive.
Revised:  Mr Howard said the ANSTO report challenged the view that the cost of nuclear power was prohibitive.
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Original:  Mr . Macfarlane said he would consider a nuclear power plant in his own Toowoomba electorate.
Revised:  Mr Macfarlane said he would consider a nuclear power plant in his own Toowoomba electorate.
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Original: A recent ANSTO report, found nuclear power could compete with gas or coal-fired electricity if taxpayers helped to pay for it or shouldered the risk of its production.
Revised: A recent report, found nuclear power could compete with gas or coal-fired electricity if taxpayers helped to pay for it or shouldered the risk of its production.
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Original:  A new campaign identifies simple measures residents can adopt to cut power bills and greenhouse emissions, including turning the heating thermostat to no more than 20C, washing clothes in cold water and turning appliances off at the switch when they are not being used   .
Revised:  A new campaign identifies simple measures residents can adopt to cut power bills and greenhouse emissions, including turning the heating thermostat to no more than 20C, washing clothes in cold water and turning appliances off at the switch when they are not being used . .
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Original:  A new campaign identifies simple measures residents can adopt to cut power bills and greenhouse emissions, including turning the heating thermostat to no more than 20C, washing clothes in cold water and turning appliances off at the switch when they are not being used   .
Revised:  A new campaign identifies simple measures residents can adopt to cut power bills and greenhouse emissions, including turning the heating thermostat to no more than 20C, washing clothes in cold water and turning appliances off at the switch when they are not being used New South Wales Premier Morris Iemma has also declared his opposition to nuclear power. He said no nuclear power stations would be built in NSW as long as he is premier. Mr Iemma urged state opposition leader Peter Debnam to join him in opposing the construction of nuclear power plants in NSW. "While ever I'm premier of NSW there won't be any nuclear power plants in NSW," he told reporters .
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Original: US Nuclear power plant Australian media reports that Prime Minister John Howard is expected to push a nuclear energy inquiry through federal cabinet this week.
Revised:  Australian media reports that Prime Minister John Howard is expected to push a nuclear energy inquiry through federal cabinet this week.
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Original: A Portuguese military column left today at the beginning of the afternoon, from Baucau to Dili, transporting the 120 soldiers and a INEM medical team.
Revised: A Portuguese military column left today at the beginning of the afternoon, from Baucau to Dili, transporting the 120 soldiers and an INEM medical team.
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Original:  The destruction of many public buildings in the last days made the Portuguese headquarters be moved from a Dili police station to the Dili Hotel 2001, a touristic complex just outside the East Timor's capital.
Revised:  The destruction of many public buildings in the last days made the Portuguese headquarters be moved from a Dili police station to the Dili Hotel 2001, a touristy complex just outside the East Timor's capital.
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Original:  This is the second time that the special operations team of the GNR acts on this former Portuguese colony, after being in East Timor between February , 2000 and June , 2002.
Revised:  This is the second time that the special operations team of the GNR acts on this former Portuguese colony, after being in East Timor between February 2000 and June , 2002.
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Original:  This is the second time that the special operations team of the GNR acts on this former Portuguese colony, after being in East Timor between February , 2000 and June , 2002.
Revised:  This is the second time that the special operations team of the GNR acts on this former Portuguese colony, after being in East Timor between February , 2000 and June 2002.
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