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Original: A photomicrograph of Bacillus anthracis bacteria The US Federal Bureau of Investigation alleges Bruce Ivins, a government bioweapons scientist who committed suicide 29 July 2008, was the sole person responsible for the biological terrorism attacks in the USA in 2001 following the 9/11 attacks.
Revised: A photomicrograph of Bacillus anthracis bacteria The US Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) has alleged that Bruce Ivins, a government bioweapons scientist who committed suicide 29 July 2008, was the sole person responsible for the biological terrorism attacks in the USA in 2001 following the 9/11 attacks.
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Original: A photomicrograph of Bacillus anthracis bacteria The US Federal Bureau of Investigation alleges Bruce Ivins, a government bioweapons scientist who committed suicide 29 July 2008, was the sole person responsible for the biological terrorism attacks in the USA in 2001 following the 9/11 attacks.
Revised: A photomicrograph of Bacillus anthracis bacteria The US Federal Bureau of Investigation alleges Bruce Ivins, a government bioweapons scientist who committed suicide July 29, 2008, was the sole person responsible for the biological terrorism attacks in the USA in 2001 following the 9/11 attacks.
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Original: A photomicrograph of Bacillus anthracis bacteria The US Federal Bureau of Investigation alleges Bruce Ivins, a government bioweapons scientist who committed suicide 29 July 2008, was the sole person responsible for the biological terrorism attacks in the USA in 2001 following the 9/11 attacks.
Revised: A photomicrograph of Bacillus anthracis bacteria The US Federal Bureau of Investigation alleges Bruce Ivins, a government bioweapons scientist who committed suicide 29 July 2008, was the sole person responsible for the biological terrorism attacks in the USA in 2001 which came shortly after the September 11.
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Original:  The FBI's conclusions, released in a press briefing by US attorney for the District of Columbia Jeffrey Taylor, has few facts but relies primarily on circumstantial evidence  reports the BBC's Kevin Connolly in Washington.
Revised:  The FBI's conclusions, released in a press briefing by US attorney for the District of Columbia Jeffrey Taylor, has few facts but relies primarily on circumstantial evidence , reports the BBC's Kevin Connolly in Washington.
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Original:  Primary amongst them is the statement that all attacks used spores from flask RMR1029, which the government says was soley created and controlled by Dr.
Revised:  Primary amongst them is the fact that all attacks used spores from flask RMR1029, which the government says was soley created and controlled by Dr.
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Original:  They resulted in 5 deaths and infecting 17 others  
Revised:  They resulted in 5 deaths and infecting 17 others . 
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Original: Primary amongst them is the fact that all attacks used spores from flask RMR1029, which the government says was soley created and controlled by Dr.
Revised: Primary amongst them is the fact that all attacks used spores from flask RMR1029, which the government says was solely created and controlled by Dr.
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Original:  They resulted in 5 deaths and infecting 17 others   .
Revised:  They resulted in 5 deaths and infecting 17 others . .
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Original:  Ivins was the only person responsible for these attacks , " said Taylor.
Revised:  Ivins was the only person responsible for these attacks . " said Taylor.
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Original:  Ivins was the only person responsible for these attacks , " said Taylor.
Revised:  Ivins was the only person responsible for these attacks , " 
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Original:  Primary amongst them is the fact that all attacks used spores from flask RMR1029, which the government says was solely created and controlled by Dr.
Revised:  Primary amongst the evidence is the fact that all attacks used spores from flask RMR1029, which the government says was solely created and controlled by Dr.
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Original:  Ivin died on July 29, 2008 shortly after being informed of the charges being brought against him.
Revised:  Ivins died on July 29, 2008 shortly after being informed of the charges being brought against him.
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Original: This 2003 photo provided by the U.S. Army Medical Research Institute of Infectious Diseases shows Dr. Bruce E.
Revised: A 2003 photo provided by the U.S. Army Medical Research Institute of Infectious Diseases shows Dr. Bruce E.
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Original: This 2003 photo provided by the U.S. Army Medical Research Institute of Infectious Diseases shows Dr. Bruce E.
Revised: This 2003 photo showing Dr. Bruce E.
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Original:  Ivins , a bio-defense researcher at Fort Detrick, Md. , participating in an awards ceremony.
Revised:  Ivins , participating in an awards ceremony.
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Original:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati  [ [ [ 
Revised:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati . [ [ [ 
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Original:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati  [ [ [ 
Revised:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati [talk [ [ 
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Original:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati  [ [ [ 
Revised:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati [ page[ [ 
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Original:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati  [ [ [ 
Revised:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati [ [of Kappa Kappa Gamma [ 
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Original:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati  [ [ [ 
Revised:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati [ [ [Ivins 
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Original:  Ppfleiger said that "most of the negative content on the [talk] page [of Kappa Kappa Gamma] is merely there because you [ Ivins ] bullied folks with threats of adding negative content and through personal emails.  
Revised:  Ppfleiger said that "most of the negative content on the [talk] page [of Kappa Kappa Gamma] is merely there because you [ Ivins ] bullied folks with threats of adding negative content and through personal emails. " 
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Original:  Below is an extract from a threat made by Jimmyflathead on the talk page of Kappa Kappa Gamma  
Revised:  Below is an extract from a threat made by Jimmyflathead on the talk page of Kappa Kappa Gamma : 
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Original:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins become obsessed with ever since he was rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati.
Revised:  The contributions from the Jimmyflathead account reveal a few hundred edits were made from December 2005 to September 2007, and almost all of them concern inclusion of information critical of Kappa Kappa Gamma, a sorority which Ivins became obsessed with after being rebuffed by a woman in the sorority during his days as a student at the University of Cincinnati.
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Original:  Now, the Jets may have to clear cap space in order to have Favre on their roster, who is due to make $ 12 million this season  which may call for the release of Chad Pennington or Kellen Clemens
Revised:  Now, the Jets may have to clear cap space in order to have Favre on their roster, who is due to make $ 12 million this season – which may call for the release of Chad Pennington or Kellen Clemens
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Original:  The trade caps a roller-coaster off-season ride for Favre and the franchise that became synonymous with his legendary No. 4 jersey, which was planned to be retired in the Packers' home opening game.
Revised: "Brett has had a long and storied career in Green Bay, and the Packers owe him a tremendous debt of gratitude for everything he accomplished," the Packers said in a press release. Jets general manager Mike Tannenbaum said of the trade, "We just felt like this was an opportunity to go get somebody of Brett's stature and what he's accomplished." The trade caps a roller-coaster off-season ride for Favre and the franchise that became synonymous with his legendary No. 4 jersey, which was planned to be retired in the Packers' home opening game.
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Original: Now, the Jets may have to clear cap space in order to have Favre on their roster — who is due to make $12 million this season — which may call for the release of Chad PenningtonRumors are already reported that the Miami Dolphins are interested in Pennington.
Revised: Now, the Jets may have to clear cap space in order to have Favre on their roster — who is due to make $12 million this season — which may call for the release of Chad Pennington.
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Original:  Johnson was charged with first-degree intentional homicide.
Revised:  The charges consist of three counts of first-degree intentional homicide.
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Original:  The Associated Press reports that he faces life in prison without parole if convicted .
Revised:  The Associated Press reports that he faces life in prison without parole if convicted ;
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Original:  Local teens said Johnson often was seen at the site, but mostly kept to himself.
Revised:  Local teens said Johnson was often seen at the site, but mostly kept to himself.
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Original:  On July 31, the Associated Press reports  he emerged from the woods wearing camouflage clothing and opened fire without saying a word.
Revised:  On July 31, the Associated Press reports , he emerged from the woods wearing camouflage clothing and opened fire without saying a word.
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Original:  The Detroit Free Press reports that  in a confession to police, Johnson said the shooting was set in motion when Johnson lured the woman to the bridge the day before and sexually assaulted her.
Revised:  The Detroit Free Press reports that , in a confession to police, Johnson said the shooting was set in motion when Johnson lured the woman to the bridge the day before and sexually assaulted her.
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Original:  The Detroit Free Press reports that  in a confession to police, Johnson said the shooting was set in motion when Johnson lured the woman to the bridge the day before and sexually assaulted her.
Revised:  The Detroit Free Press reports that in a confession to police, Johnson said the shooting was set in motion when he lured a woman to the bridge the day before and sexually assaulted her.
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Original:  He says he then got his weapons and returned to the woods.
Revised:  He reportedly said that he then got his weapons and returned to the woods.
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Original:  Johnson said he planned to wait for the teens to reach the Michigan side of the river so he could kill them all and use them as "bait" to lure police into his ambush.
Revised:  He planned to wait for the teens to reach the Michigan side of the river so he could kill them all and use them as "bait" to lure police into his ambush.
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Original:  However, Spigarelli and Pohlson unexpectedly approached his position, and he said he felt trapped and he opened fire.
Revised:  However, Spigarelli and Pohlson unexpectedly approached his position, and he said he felt trapped and so opened fire.
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Original:  On July 31, the Associated Press reports, he emerged from the woods wearing camouflage clothing and opened fire without saying a word.
Revised:  On July 31, he emerged from the woods wearing camouflage clothing and opened fire without saying a word.
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Original:  The Detroit Free Press reports that, in a confession to police, Johnson said the shooting was set in motion when he lured a woman to the bridge the day before and sexually assaulted her.
Revised:  In a confession to police, Johnson said the shooting was set in motion when he lured a woman to the bridge the day before and sexually assaulted her.
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Original: Nadar is also planning on putting his name on the ballot in Iowa.
Revised: Nader is also planning on putting his name on the ballot in Iowa.
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Original: JPG|Peace and Freedom Party presidential nominee Ralph Nader]]Independent United States presidential candidate Ralph Nader and his running mate Matt Gonzalez were selected as the presidential and vice-presidential nominees of the California Peace and Freedom Party during its convention on August 2. Nader won the nomination with 46 votes or 60.7\% of the ballots edging challengers Gloria La Riva, Brian Moore and Cynthia McKinney.
Revised: JPG|Peace and Freedom Party presidential nominee Ralph Nader]]Independent United States presidential candidate Ralph Nader and his running mate Matt Gonzalez were selected as the presidential and vice-presidential nominees of the California Peace and Freedom Party during its convention on August 2. Nader won the nomination with 46 votes or 60.7\% of the ballots , edging out challengers Gloria La Riva, Brian Moore and Cynthia McKinney.
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Original:  Following the nomination, the Peace and Freedom Party praised Nader and Gonzalez arguing that " Both nominees agree with the fundamentals of the Peace and Freedom platform and bring with them a strong combination of experience, credibility, and legislative accomplishment.”
Revised:  Following the nomination, the Peace and Freedom Party praised Nader and Gonzalez , arguing that, " Both nominees agree with the fundamentals of the Peace and Freedom platform and bring with them a strong combination of experience, credibility, and legislative accomplishment.”
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Original:  Following the nomination, the Peace and Freedom Party praised Nader and Gonzalez arguing that " Both nominees agree with the fundamentals of the Peace and Freedom platform and bring with them a strong combination of experience, credibility, and legislative accomplishment.”
Revised:  Following the nomination, the Peace and Freedom Party praised Nader and Gonzalez arguing that " both nominees agree with the fundamentals of the Peace and Freedom platform and bring with them a strong combination of experience, credibility, and legislative accomplishment.”
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Original:  The party platform includes support for Socialism, Feminism and Environmentalism
Revised:  The party platform includes support for socialism, feminism and environmentalism
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Original:  He also has the option to dissolve parliament, though this will likely lead to political chaos
Revised:  He also has the option to dissolve parliament, though this would likely lead to political chaos
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Original:  The impeachment process should start within the following weak .
Revised:  The impeachment process should start within the following week .
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Original:  The impeachment process should start within the following week.
Revised:  The impeachment process is planned to start within the following week.
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Original:  If the coalition is successful, Musharraf will be the first president in Pakistan's sixty one year history to have been impeached.
Revised:  If the coalition is successful, Musharraf will be the first president in Pakistan's sixty-one year history to have been impeached.
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Original:  Musharraf has canceled his trip to the Beijing Olympics so that he can focus on planning out a response against the coalition.
Revised:  Musharraf has canceled his trip to the Beijing Olympics so that he can focus on planning a response to the coalition.
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Original:  His decision will depend largely on the support of the military,  which he acted as chief of until international pressure forced him to step down a year ago.
Revised:  Successfully defeating the impeachment will depend largely on the support of the military, which he acted as chief of until international pressure forced him to step down a year ago.
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Original:  His decision will depend largely on the support of the military,  which he acted as chief of until international pressure forced him to step down a year ago.
Revised:  His decision will depend largely on the support of the military, for which he acted as chief of until international pressure forced him to step down a year ago.
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Original:  His decision will depend largely on the support of the military,  which he acted as chief of until international pressure forced him to step down a year ago.
Revised:  His decision will depend largely on the support of the military, which he acted as chief until international pressure forced him to step down a year ago.
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Original:  Musharraf could declare a state of emergency, which may aid him in getting the support of the military .
Revised:  Other options Musharraf may explore include declaring a state of emergency, which may aid him in getting the support of the military .
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Original:  Musharraf could declare a state of emergency, which may aid him in getting the support of the military .
Revised:  Musharraf could declare a state of emergency, which could aid him in getting the support of the military .
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Original:  The other two children would be traveling from Europe in the next hours for the funeral
Revised:  The other two children are expected to arrive from Europe soon to attend the funeral
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Original:  The other two children are expected to arrive from Europe soon to attend the funeral   
Revised:  The other two children are expected to arrive from Europe soon to attend the funeral . 
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Original: The body has been moved to the former National Congress  so that the body can be guarded until the state funeral, which takes place at 11:00 local time tomorrow.
Revised: The body has been moved to the former National Congress building so that the body can be guarded until the state funeral, which takes place at 11:00 local time tomorrow.
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Original:  Bustos died as a result of a liver cancer. 
Revised:  Bustos died as a result of a liver cancer. He was 72 years old.
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Original:  Thousands of refugees are leaving South Ossetia, mostly for North Ossetia, says UN refugee agency.
Revised:  Thousands of refugees are leaving South Ossetia, mostly for North Ossetia, says the United Nations refugee agency.
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Original: Witnessed by  90,000 spectators or more , the Opening Ceremony of the 2008 Olympic Games was held at the National Stadium — nicknamed "Bird's Nest" — in Beijing China this evening.
Revised: Witnessed by 90,000 spectators , the Opening Ceremony of the 2008 Olympic Games was held at the National Stadium — nicknamed "Bird's Nest" — in Beijing China this evening.
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Original:  There were also solo performances by en: Lang Lang, Sarah Brightman, and Liu Huan
Revised:  There were also solo performances by Lang Lang, Sarah Brightman, and Liu Huan
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Original:  White House spokesman Scott McClellan criticized Newsweek's initial response to the incident, saying it was "puzzling."
Revised:  White House Press Secretary Scott McClellan criticized Newsweek's initial response to the incident, saying it was "puzzling."
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Original: June 4, 2005 The cover of the Qur'an After an investigation of allegations that Islam's holy book the Qu'ran was desecrated in front of inmates at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba, the Bush administration has acknowleged the credibility of some of these reports.
Revised:  The cover of the Qur'an After an investigation of allegations that Islam's holy book the Qu'ran was desecrated in front of inmates at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba, the Bush administration has acknowleged the credibility of some of these reports.
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Original: The cover of the Qur'an After an investigation of allegations that Islam's holy book the Qu'ran was desecrated in front of inmates at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba, the Bush administration has acknowleged the credibility of some of these reports.
Revised: The cover of the Qur'an After an investigation of allegations that Islam's holy book the Qu'ran was mishandled in front of inmates at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba, the Bush administration has acknowleged the credibility of some of these reports.
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Original:  It is possible that the known toll of dead and injured could rise further  
Revised:  It is possible that the known toll of dead and injured could rise further . 
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Original:  Many of the passengers were travelling to a music festival in Pardubice.
Revised:  Many of the passengers were traveling to a music festival in Pardubice.
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