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Original: Forest Magic is the main way to change the appearance of one's avatar, but the player cannot change his or her own look (The exceptions being some antlers, and the pelt acquired at the Crying Idol. ) Other deer must cast spells on them in order to change their look, and it is up to the player to communicate and ask others to change their appearance for them.
Revised: Forest Magic is the main way to change the appearance of one's avatar, but the player cannot change his or her own look . Other deer must cast spells on them in order to change their look, and it is up to the player to communicate and ask others to change their appearance for them.
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Original:  Only adult deer can keep the spells cast on them, however, registered deer will have the magic cast on them saved for the next time they log on.
Revised:  Only adult deer can keep the spells cast on them, however, deers will have the magic cast on them saved for the next time they log on.
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Original:  Because The Endless Forest has no chat box, or any human means of communication , players must resort to an action strip along the bottom of the game .
Revised:  Because The Endless Forest has no chat , there is no means of communication , players must resort to an action strip along the bottom of the game .
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Original:  Because The Endless Forest has no chat box, or any human means of communication , players must resort to an action strip along the bottom of the game .
Revised:  Because The Endless Forest has no chat box, or any human means of communication .
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Original:  Pictograms above registered deers' heads represent their names.
Revised:  Pictograms above registered deer's heads represent their names.
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Original:  Common activities include exploring the forest, eating, drinking water  and sleeping under the trees.
Revised:  Common activities include exploring the forest, eating, drinking water , and sleeping under the trees.
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Original:  It is an event that happens either randomly, or organised .
Revised:  It is an event that happens either randomly, or organized in advance .
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Original:  Other deer must cast spells on them in order to change their look , and it is up to the player to communicate and ask others to change their appearance for them.
Revised:  Other deer must cast spells on them in order to change their appearance , and it is up to the player to communicate and ask others to change their appearance for them.
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Original:  Only adult deer can keep the spells cast on them, however , deers will have the magic cast on them saved for the next time they log on .
Revised:  Only adult deer can keep the spells cast on them, however .
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Original:  Because The Endless Forest has no chat, there is no means of communication .
Revised:  Because The Endless Forest .
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Original:  There is also a worship button, which can only be used when near the Twin Gods Statue (see Forest Magic) and a deer shaped button where you can remove the spells the avatar is wearing.
Revised:  There is also a worship button, which can only be used when near the Twin Gods Statue and a deer shaped button where you can remove the spells the avatar is wearing.
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Original:  The localized deposits of metal ores near the surface which can be extracted eI LIKE MEN :)conomically by humans are non-renewable in human time-frames.
Revised:  The localized deposits of metal ores near the surface which can be extracted economically by humans are non-renewable in human time-frames.
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Original:  There are certain rare earth minerals and elements that are I LIKE MEN MORE THAN YOU more scarce and exhaustible than others.
Revised:  There are certain rare earth minerals and elements that are more scarce and exhaustible than others.
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Original:  Economic models In economics, a non-renewable resource is defined as GAY goods, where greater consumption today implies less consumption tomorrow.
Revised:  Economic models In economics, a non-renewable resource is defined as goods, where greater consumption today implies less consumption tomorrow.
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Original: Inheritance Image:Autorecessive.svg|Iminoglycinuria has an autosomal recessive pattern of inheritance.
Revised:  Image:Autorecessive.svg|Iminoglycinuria has an autosomal recessive pattern of inheritance.
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Original: Inheritance Image:Autorecessive.svg|Iminoglycinuria has an autosomal recessive pattern of inheritance.
Revised: Inheritance 
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Original: Iminoglycinuria, sometimes called familial iminoglycinuria, is an autosomal recessive disorder of renal tubular transport affecting reabsorption of the amino acid glycine, and the imino acids proline and hydroxyproline.
Revised: Iminoglycinuria, is an autosomal recessive disorder of renal tubular transport affecting reabsorption of the amino acid glycine, and the imino acids proline and hydroxyproline.
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Original: Botany Online: Basic metabolism - Biosynthesis - Amino acids URL  acids - Proline URL Hydroxyproline is another imino acid, made from the naturally occurring hydroxylation of proline.
Revised: Botany Online: Basic metabolism - Biosynthesis - Amino acids URL Amino acids - Proline URL Hydroxyproline is another imino acid, made from the naturally occurring hydroxylation of proline.
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Original: The Code of Safe Working Practices (COSWP) is published by the Maritime and Coastguard Agency (MCA) of the UK.
Revised: The Code of Safe Working Practices (COSWP) is published by the Maritimwerwerwere and Coastguard Agency (MCA) of the UK.
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Original: The Code of Safe Working Practices (COSWP) is published by the Maritimwerwerwere and Coastguard Agency (MCA) of the UK.
Revised: The Code of Safe Working Practices (COSWP) is published by the Maritime and Coastguard Agency (MCA) of the UK.
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Original:  The code details the regulatory framework for health and safety aboard ship, safety management and statutory duties underlying to the advice in the code and the areas that should be covered when introducing a new recruit to safety procedures on URL
Revised:  The code details the regulatory framework for health and safety aboard ship, safety management and statutory duties underlying to the advice in the code and the areas that should be covered when introducing a new recruit to safety procedures on board.
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Original:  He considers natives as primitives below him, because they lack his Catholic faith and European sophistication.
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Original:  In his article for "Dziennik" he notes that he "prefers savages rather than gay parades".
Revised:  In his article for "Dziennik" he notes that he "prefers wild people rather than gay parades".
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Original:  He says that "gay people should be pointed at, as the sin of sodomy evokes disgust" .
Revised:  He says that "gay people should be pointed at, as the sin of sodomy evokes disgust" 
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Original:  As far as above mentioned "savages" - that's how he refers to native Indians, whom he often visits on his travels and receives their hospitality .
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Original:  In his rhetoric, Cejrowski refers to LGBT people as sodomites, buggers, and pederasts .
Revised:  In his rhetoric, Cejrowski refers to LGBT people as "sodomites", "buggers", and "pederasts" .
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Original:  Cejrowski thinks that evolution is not true, he believes in creationism.
Revised:  Cejrowski believes in creationism.
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Original:  Cejrowski is also strongly against abortion and abortion providers .
Revised:  Cejrowski is also strongly against abortion .
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Original:  The most common investigation in this field is the Pap test, which is used to screen for cervical intraepithelial neoplasia precancerous lesions of the cervix.
Revised:  The most common investigation in this field is the Pap test, which is used to screen for potentially precancerous lesions of the cervix.
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Original:  Cytology can also be used to investigate disorders of the ovaries, uterus, vagina and vulv 
Revised:  Cytology can also be used to investigate disorders of the ovaries, uterus, vagina and vulva. 
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Original: Gynaecologic cytology, also gynaecologic cytopathology , is a field of pathology concerned with the investigation of disorders of the female genital tract.
Revised: Gynecologic cytology, also gynaecologic cytopathology , is a field of pathology concerned with the investigation of disorders of the female genital tract.
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Original: Gynaecologic cytology, also gynaecologic cytopathology , is a field of pathology concerned with the investigation of disorders of the female genital tract.
Revised: Gynaecologic cytology, also Gynecologic cytology , is a field of pathology concerned with the investigation of disorders of the female genital tract.
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Original:  Category: Gynaecology Category:Cytopathology Category:Patholo
Revised:  Category: Gynecology Category:Cytopathology Category:Patholo
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Original: Official Documents of the 4th Session of the United Nations General Assembly, United Nations, 1949, page 11.
Revised: Official Documents of the 4th Session of the United Nations General Assembly, United Nations, 1949, page 11
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Original:  Following the abolition of the Senate in 1981, the membership of the House of Assembly was enlarged, with eight additional indirectly elected members, being elected by other members by means of proportional representation, and four being appointed by the State President .
Revised:  Following the abolition of the Senate in 1981, the membership of the House of Assembly was increased included 12 additional members, of whom four were appointed by the State President .
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Original: South-West Africa In 1949, the South West Africa Affairs Amendment Act extended parliament representation to South West Africa's white minority, who elected six MPs to the House of Assembly.
Revised: South West Africa In 1949, the South West Africa Affairs Amendment Act extended parliament representation to South West Africa's white minority, who elected six MPs to the House of Assembly.
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Original: Section 35 of the South Africa Act 1909 The voters in the Orange Free State, Transvaal and South-West Africa had to be qualified white people, throughout the whole period when those areas were represented in the House of Assembly.
Revised: Section 35 of the South Africa Act 1909 The voters in the Orange Free State, Transvaal and South West Africa had to be qualified white people, throughout the whole period when those areas were represented in the House of Assembly.
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Original: The South African Constitution, page 95: H.J. May, writing in 1955, discussed the qualification for non-europeans in Natal to be voters on the common (or general) roll.
Revised: The South African Constitution, page 95: H.J. May, writing in 1955, discussed the qualification for non-Europeans in Natal to be voters on the common (or general) roll.
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Original:  Decision-making and Western Intervention in Namibia, Vivienne Jabri, Manchester University Press, 1990, page 46 South-West Africa's representation in the South African Parliament was abolished in 1977, to pave the way for independence for the territory . South Africa 1978:
Revised:  Decision-making and Western Intervention in Namibia, Vivienne Jabri, Manchester University Press, 1990, page 46 South West Africa's representation in the South African Parliament was abolished in 1977, to pave the way for independence for the territory . South Africa 1978:
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Original:  Official Yearbook of the Republic of South Africa, Volume 5, State Department of Information, 1978, page 141 Tricameral Parliament In the Tricameral Parliament, the House of Assembly (by this time numbering 178 members) was retained as the whites-only chamber while the House of Representatives and House of Delegates were designated to Coloureds and Asians respectively.
Revised:  Official Yearbook of the Republic of South Africa, Volume 5, State Department of Information, 1978, page 141 Tricameral Parliament In the Tricameral Parliament, the House of Assembly (by this time numbering 178 members) was retained as the Whites-only chamber while the House of Representatives and House of Delegates were designated to Coloureds and Asians respectively.
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Original:  Cape of Good Hope Nat: Natal OFS: Orange Free State SWA: South-West Africa (represented in the House 1950–1977) Tvl: Transvaal Non-general roll seats (not filled at general elections) CCRM: Cape Coloured representative members (represented in the House 1958–1970) CNRM: Cape Native representative members (represented in the House 1937–1960) IE: Indirectly elected, by the directly elected MPs (represented in the House January 1981 –
Revised:  Cape of Good Hope Nat: Natal OFS: Orange Free State SWA: South West Africa (represented in the House 1950–1977) Tvl: Transvaal Non-general roll seats (not filled at general elections) CCRM: Cape Coloured representative members (represented in the House 1958–1970) CNRM: Cape Native representative members (represented in the House 1937–1960) IE: Indirectly elected, by the directly elected MPs (represented in the House January 1981 –
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Original:  All three were later released on December 3, 2011 for URL
Revised:  All three were later released on December 3, 2011 for ransom.
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Original:  October 3: A militant group abducted four Scots, a Malaysian, an Indonesian and a Romanian from a bar in Akwa Ibom URL
Revised:  October 3: A militant group abducted four Scots, a Malaysian, an Indonesian and a Romanian from a bar in Akwa Ibom state.
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Original:  Australia In Australia, most government scientists are employed by the Commonwealth Scientific and Industrial Research Organisation.
Revised:  Australia In Australia, most government scientists are employed by the Commonwealth Scientific and Industrial Research Organisation.
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Original:  States and cities employ scientists in similar rôles , including at fish and game commissions, parks, aquariums, arboretums, and museums;
Revised:  States and cities employ scientists in similar roles , including at fish and game commissions, parks, aquariums, arboretums, and museums;
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Original:  And goverment sci3ent
Revised:  And government people can suck toes daily
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Original:  In some countries other terms such Technical officers is also used for scientists.
Revised:  In some countries other terms ,such as Technical officers, is also used for scientists.
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Original: The Long, Long Trail – The British Army of 1914–1918–for family historians He was awarded the French Croix de Guerre avec Palmes
Revised: The Long, Long Trail – The British Army of 1914–1918–for family historians He was awarded the French Croix de Guerre .
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Original: Recognition He was awarded the French Croix de Guerre avec Palmes and was Mentioned in Despatches for services in the First World War.
Revised: Recognition He was awarded the French Croix de Guerre and was Mentioned in Despatches for services in the First World War.
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Original:  His efforts were recognised by the post-war Italian Government on 25 November 1949 when he, as the Camp Commandant, and three of his officers were invested with the Order of the Star of Italy (Stella della Solidarieta) .
Revised:  His efforts were recognised by the post-war Italian Government on 25 November 1949 when he, as the Camp Commandant, and three of his officers were invested with the Order of the Star of Italy .
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Original:  Prinsloo was further recognised by the award of the Order of Good Merit (Ordine di Bene Merente) by the Pope.
Revised:  Prinsloo was further recognised by the award of the Order of Good Merit by the Pope.
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Original:  As a twelve-year-old boy Hendrik Frederik Prinsloo was interned by the British in a concentration camp during the Anglo-Boer War but served alongside the British in the South African forces during the two World Wars.
Revised:  As a twelve-year-old boy , he was interned by the British in a concentration camp during the Anglo-Boer War but served alongside the British in the South African forces during the two World Wars.
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Original:  As a twelve-year-old boy, he was interned by the British in a concentration camp during the Anglo-Boer War but served alongside the British in the South African forces during the two World Wars.
Revised:  As a 12-year-old boy, he was interned by the British in a concentration camp during the Anglo-Boer War but served alongside the British in the South African forces during the two World Wars.
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Original:  As a boy of twelve he was taken prisoner-of-war by the British while carrying arms in his father's Commando (the Carolinaers) during the Second Boer War.
Revised:  As a boy of 12 he was taken prisoner-of-war by the British while carrying arms in his father's Commando (the Carolinaers) during the Second Boer War.
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Original:  He is best remembered for the humanitarian manner in which he, as Commandant , ran the Zonderwater Italian POW camp.
Revised:  He is best remembered for the humanitarian manner in which he, as commandant , ran the Zonderwater Italian POW camp.
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Original:  He is best remembered for the humanitarian manner in which he, as Commandant , ran the Zonderwater Italian POW camp.
Revised:  He is best remembered for the humanitarian manner in which he, as Commandant , ran the Zonderwater Italian prisoner of war camp.
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Original: Early life Hendrik Frederik Prinsloo was the son of Commandant Hendrik Frederik Prinsloo (1861–1900), who commanded the Carolina Boer Commando at the Battle of Spion Kop and was killed in action at Witkloof, and his wife, Cecilia Maria Steyn.
Revised: Early life Prinsloo was the son of Commandant Hendrik Frederik Prinsloo (1861–1900), who commanded the Carolina Boer Commando at the Battle of Spion Kop and was killed in action at Witkloof, and his wife, Cecilia Maria Steyn.
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Original: Early life Hendrik Frederik Prinsloo was the son of Commandant Hendrik Frederik Prinsloo (1861–1900), who commanded the Carolina Boer Commando at the Battle of Spion Kop and was killed in action at Witkloof, and his wife, Cecilia Maria Steyn.
Revised: Early life Hendrik Frederik Prinsloo was the son of commandant Hendrik Frederik Prinsloo (1861–1900), who commanded the Carolina Boer Commando at the Battle of Spion Kop and was killed in action at Witkloof, and his wife, Cecilia Maria Steyn.
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Original:  As a boy of 12 he was taken prisoner-of-war by the British while carrying arms in his father's Commando (the Carolinaers) during the Second Boer War.
Revised:  As a boy of 12 he was taken prisoner of war by the British while carrying arms in his father's Commando (the Carolinaers) during the Second Boer War.
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Original:  On 26 November 1915  he joined the 1st Regiment, Military Constabulary.
Revised:  On 26 November 1915 , he joined the 1st Regiment, Military Constabulary.
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Original:  On 31 December 1919  he resigned from the army and assumed an appointment with the Permanent Police Force as headquarters sub-inspector.
Revised:  On 31 December 1919 , he resigned from the army and assumed an appointment with the Permanent Police Force as headquarters sub-inspector.
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Original:  In 1947  he represented South Africa at the Diplomatic Conference held in Geneva for the purpose of revising the International Convention Relative to the Treatment of Prisoners-of-War, that is, the Geneva Convention of 1929.
Revised:  In 1947 , he represented South Africa at the Diplomatic Conference held in Geneva for the purpose of revising the International Convention Relative to the Treatment of Prisoners-of-War, that is, the Geneva Convention of 1929.
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Original:  On 28 August 1947  he was transferred to the reserve of officers.
Revised:  On 28 August 1947 , he was transferred to the reserve of officers.
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Original:  Zonderwater POW camp Theatre, library, shop and welfare offices complex at Zonderwater POW camp On 12 November 1941  Prinsloo was posted to No 8 Prisoner of War Battalion, First Reserve Brigade.
Revised:  Zonderwater prisoner of war camp Theatre, library, shop and welfare offices complex at Zonderwater POW camp On 12 November 1941 Prinsloo was posted to No 8 Prisoner of War Battalion, First Reserve Brigade.
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Original:  Zonderwater POW camp Theatre, library, shop and welfare offices complex at Zonderwater POW camp On 12 November 1941  Prinsloo was posted to No 8 Prisoner of War Battalion, First Reserve Brigade.
Revised:  Zonderwater POW camp Theatre, library, shop and welfare offices complex at Zonderwater POW camp On 12 November 1941 , Prinsloo was posted to No 8 Prisoner of War Battalion, First Reserve Brigade.
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Original:  In 1940  he doffed his uniform to win the Provincial Council by-election in the constituency of Carolina, and represented it in the Transvaal Provincial Council for six years.
Revised:  In 1940 , he doffed his uniform to win the Provincial Council by-election in the constituency of Carolina, and represented it in the Transvaal Provincial Council for six years.
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Original:  On 10 April 1946  he married Grace Madeleine Sedgwick.
Revised:  On 10 April 1946 , he married Grace Madeleine Sedgwick.
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Original:  Definitions Translational medicine is defined by the European Society for Translational Medicine (EUSTM) as "an interdisciplinary branch of the biomedical field supported by three main pillars: benchside, bedside and community."
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Original:  It is defined for school-based education by the Education Futures Collaboration (www.meshguides.org) as research which translates concepts to classroom practice.
Revised:  In the field of education, it is defined for school-based education by the Education Futures Collaboration (www.meshguides.org) as research which translates concepts to classroom practice.
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Original:  Translational  research adopts a scientific investigation/ enquiry into a given problem facing medical/health practices to surmount such problem which will helps to raise aggregate health performance .
Revised:  Translational research adopts a scientific investigation/ enquiry into a given problem facing medical/health practices to surmount such problems .
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Original:  J Biol Med Res Vol.2 No.2:13 In a medical research context, it aims to "translate" findings in fundamental research into medical practiceand meaningful health outcomes.
Revised:  J Biol Med Res Vol.2 No.2:13 where in it aims to "translate" findings in fundamental research into medical practiceand meaningful health outcomes.
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Original:  Translational research implements a " bench-to-bedside "  , from laboratory experiments through clinical trials to point-of-care patient applications , model, harnessing knowledge from basic sciences to produce new drugs, devices, and treatment options for patients .
Revised:  Translational research implements a " bench-to-bedside " , from laboratory experiments through clinical trials to point-of-care patient applications .
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Original:  The end point of translational research  is the production of a promising new treatment that can be used with practical applications, that can then be used clinicallyor are able to be commercialized.
Revised:  The end point of translational research in medicine is the production of a promising new treatment that can be used with practical applications, that can then be used clinicallyor are able to be commercialized.
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