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Original:  Photos taken by cdunbar The settlements or feiras typically had a Captain, a Priest and a small permanent community living in several brick built fortified houses surrounded by earth walls and ditches. pp197 A history of Mozambique 1994 by Malyn Newitt Angwa (Ongoe) A complex of forts.
Revised:  The settlements or feiras typically had a Captain, a Priest and a small permanent community living in several brick built fortified houses surrounded by earth walls and ditches. pp197 A history of Mozambique 1994 by Malyn Newitt Angwa (Ongoe) A complex of forts.
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Original:  Today's localization is in Two Three URL pp99
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Original:  Previous research (P S Garlake, D P Abraham, E Goodall and Chris Dunbar) collated by Chris Dunbar He designated them as National Monuments.
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Original:  However, he even lost Karaman, his capital city (ancient Larende) to his rebelling brother İbrahim  who was backed by the Mamluks of Egypt.
Revised:  However, he even lost Karaman, his capital city (ancient Larende) to his rebelling brother İbrahim , who was backed by the Mamluks of Egypt.
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Original:  But in 1352, after a choas period in the beylik, he was invited to Karaman  where he ruled till 1356.
Revised:  But in 1352, after a choas period in the beylik, he was invited to Karaman , where he ruled till 1356.
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Original:  But in 1352, after a choas period in the beylik, he was invited to Karaman, where he ruled till 1356.
Revised:  But in 1352, after a chaos period in the beylik, he was invited to Karaman, where he ruled till 1356.
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Original:  Rupert and family were ranked as the second-richest in South Africa on the 2020 Forbes list of The World's Billionaires , with a fortune reported as US$5.4 billion.
Revised:  Rupert and family were ranked as the second-richest in South Africa on the 2020 Forbes list , with a fortune reported as US$5.4 billion.
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Original:  During his years as Governor of Punjab, he generally received a positive response from the Punjabi press and the Punjabi people accepted him as one of their own due to his strong campaigning for Punjabi interests in India.
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Original:  Education Born  in Bombay in 1933, he was educated at St. Xaviers High School in Bombay.
Revised:  Born in Bombay in 1933, he was educated at St. Xaviers High School in Bombay.
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Original:  Education Born  in Bombay in 1933, he was educated at St. Xaviers High School in Bombay.
Revised:  Education Early Life in Bombay in 1933, he was educated at St. Xaviers High School in Bombay.
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Original:  Education Born  in Bombay in 1933, he was educated at St. Xaviers High School in Bombay.
Revised:  Education Born in Bombay in 1933. He was educated at St. Xaviers High School in Bombay.
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Original:  He attended the Defence Services Staff College and took over as GSOII operations in XXXIII Corps HQ in 1971.
Revised:  He attended the Defence Services Staff College and took over as GSO II operations in XXXIII Corps HQ in 1971.
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Original:  He later served as a GSOI operations of a division from 1973 to 1975.
Revised:  He later served as a GSO I operations of a division from 1973 to 1975.
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Original:  He commanded a mountain infantry brigade in a high altitude sector from 1975 to 1977 then attended the 1978 course at Royal College of Defence Studies in the UK . He was Chief Instructor at Defence Services Staff College from 1979 to November 1981, then took over the command of a division in a high altitude area.
Revised:  He commanded a mountain infantry brigade in a high altitude sector from 1975 to 1977. Post this, Rodrigues attended the 1978 course at Royal College of Defence Studies in the UK . He was Chief Instructor at Defence Services Staff College from 1979 to November 1981, then took over the command of a division in a high altitude area.
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Original:  He commanded a mountain infantry brigade in a high altitude sector from 1975 to 1977 then attended the 1978 course at Royal College of Defence Studies in the UK . He was Chief Instructor at Defence Services Staff College from 1979 to November 1981, then took over the command of a division in a high altitude area.
Revised:  He commanded a mountain infantry brigade in a high altitude sector from 1975 to 1977 then attended the 1978 course at Royal College of Defence Studies in the United Kingdom . He was Chief Instructor at Defence Services Staff College from 1979 to November 1981, then took over the command of a division in a high altitude area.
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Original:  In 1982, he was awarded the master's degree in Defence Studies , was the Chief of Staff of a Corps from 1983 to September 1985 then took over as Director General Military Training  .
Revised:  In 1982, he was awarded the master's degree in Defence Studies . He then served as the Chief of Staff of a Corps from 1983 to September 1985 then took over as Director General Military Training .
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Original:  In 1982, he was awarded the master's degree in Defence Studies , was the Chief of Staff of a Corps from 1983 to September 1985 then took over as Director General Military Training  .
Revised:  In 1982, he was awarded the master's degree in Defence Studies , was the Chief of Staff of a Corps from 1983 to September 1985 after which he took over as Director General Military Training .
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Original:  He was Vice Chief of Army Staff from November 1987 to April 1989 and then GOC-in-C of Central Command from April 1989 to October 1989.
Revised:  He was Vice Chief of Army Staff from November 1987 to April 1989 and then General Officer Commanding-in-Chief of Central Command from April 1989 to October 1989.
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Original:  He retired on 30 June 1993 after nearly 41 years of service . General Rodrigues was known among his compatriots as a thinker and a strategist .
Revised:  He retired on 30 June 1993 after nearly 41 years of service General Rodrigues was known among his compatriots as a thinker and a strategist .
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Original:  He retired on 30 June 1993 after nearly 41 years of service . General Rodrigues was known among his compatriots as a thinker and a strategist .
Revised:  He retired on 30 June 1993 after nearly 41 years of service . .
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Original: Early Life  Education Rodrigues was born in Bombay in 1933.
Revised: Early Life and Education Rodrigues was born in Bombay in 1933.
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Original: Early Life and Education Rodrigues was born in Bombay in 1933.
Revised: Early life and education Rodrigues was born in Bombay in 1933.
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Original:  After commanding several field and self-proppelled artillery units he applied of pilot training in the Air Observation Post of the Artillery in 1964 and qualified as an artillery aviation pilot.
Revised:  After serving in several field and self-proppelled artillery units he applied of pilot training in the Air Observation Post of the Artillery in 1964 and qualified as an artillery aviation pilot.
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Original:  After commanding several field and self-proppelled artillery units he applied of pilot training in the Air Observation Post of the Artillery in 1964 and qualified as an artillery aviation pilot.
Revised:  After commanding several field and self-propelled artillery units he applied of pilot training in the Air Observation Post of the Artillery in 1964 and qualified as an artillery aviation pilot.
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Original:  The Diabetic RetinaScreen programme was rolled out in URL Kenya The PEEK (Portable Eye Examination Kit) program has screened 2500 people in Kenya, and incorporates geo-tagging to facilitate follow-up treatment and demographic URL
Revised:  The Diabetic RetinaScreen programme was rolled out in URL Kenya The PEEK (Portable Eye Examination Kit) program has screened 2500 people in Kenya, and incorporates geo-tagging to facilitate follow-up treatment and demographic research.
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Original:  State of Buryat-Mongolia () was a buffer Buryat-Mongolian state,Бабаков В. В., Бурнацком - Бурнардума: первый опыт национально-государственного строительства в Бурятии, Улан-Удэ, 1997 г. which existed during the Russian Civil War.
Revised: The State of Buryat-Mongolia () was a buffer Buryat-Mongolian state,Бабаков В. В., Бурнацком - Бурнардума: первый опыт национально-государственного строительства в Бурятии, Улан-Удэ, 1997 г. which existed during the Russian Civil War.
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Original: The State of Buryat-Mongolia () was a buffer Buryat-Mongolian state,Бабаков В. В., Бурнацком - Бурнардума: первый опыт национально-государственного строительства в Бурятии, Улан-Удэ, 1997 г. which existed during the Russian Civil War.
Revised: The State of Buryat-Mongolia was a buffer Buryat-Mongolian state,Бабаков В. В., Бурнацком - Бурнардума: первый опыт национально-государственного строительства в Бурятии, Улан-Удэ, 1997 г. which existed during the Russian Civil War.
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Original: Образование Бурят-Монгольской АССР как реализация национальной политики Советского государства The state de facto ceased to exist after the formation of the Far Eastern Republic, which had divided Buryat-Mongolia in two halves: 4 aimags became part of the Far Eastern Republic, while the other 4 formed Buryat-Mongol autonomies of RSFSR. 
Revised: Образование Бурят-Монгольской АССР как реализация национальной политики Советского государства The state de facto ceased to exist after the formation of the Far Eastern Republic, which had divided Buryat-Mongolia in two halves: 4 aimags became part of the Far Eastern Republic, while the other 4 formed Buryat-Mongol autonomies of RSFSR. Notes
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Original:  Бабаков В. В., Бурнацком - Бурнардума: первый опыт национально-государственного строительства в Бурятии, Улан-Удэ, 1997 г.
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Original:  The main government body was Burnazkom , the Buryat National Committee.
Revised:  The main government body was Burnatskom , the Buryat National Committee.
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Original: If one prefers to call Perelman a Polish Jew, then only in the sense suggested by Czeslaw Milosz...  a special category of Jewish-European intellectual, different from all the other Jewish and non-Jewish intellectuals...
Revised: If one prefers to call Perelman a Polish Jew, then only in the sense suggested by Czeslaw Milosz... he belonged to a special category of Jewish-European intellectual, different from all the other Jewish and non-Jewish intellectuals...
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Original: Perelman was uniquely able to combine his nationality and his humanity in his writings  He was an ardent Belgian patriot and he preserved close ties with Polish scholars and Polish culture at the same time".
Revised: Perelman was uniquely able to combine his nationality and his humanity in his writings . He was an ardent Belgian patriot and he preserved close ties with Polish scholars and Polish culture at the same time".
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Original:  Upon completing the study, Perelman considered its conclusion untenable since value judgments form an integral part of all practical reasoning and decision making , and to claim that these judgments lack any logical basis was to deny the rational foundations of philosophy, law, politics, and ethics.
Revised:  Upon completing the study, Perelman considered its conclusion untenable since value judgments form an integral part of all practical reasoning and decision-making , and to claim that these judgments lack any logical basis was to deny the rational foundations of philosophy, law, politics, and ethics.
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Original:  In the Posterior analytics , Aristotle establishes the principles of demonstration or analytics, which rely on the accepted premises and necessary conclusions of the syllogism.
Revised:  In the Posterior Analytics , Aristotle establishes the principles of demonstration or analytics, which rely on the accepted premises and necessary conclusions of the syllogism.
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Original:  "Epideictic oratory , "  Perelman argues, "has significance and importance for argumentation because it strengthens the disposition toward action by increasing adherence to the values it lauds" (1969, p. 50).
Revised:  "Epideictic oratory " Perelman argues, "has significance and importance for argumentation because it strengthens the disposition toward action by increasing adherence to the values it lauds" (1969, p. 50).
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Original:  "Epideictic oratory , "  Perelman argues, "has significance and importance for argumentation because it strengthens the disposition toward action by increasing adherence to the values it lauds" (1969, p. 50).
Revised:  "Epideictic oratory , " , Perelman argues, "has significance and importance for argumentation because it strengthens the disposition toward action by increasing adherence to the values it lauds" (1969, p. 50).
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Original:  These loci or commonplaces are derived from the third book of Aristotle's Topics  and allow agreement according to the determination of which, between two loci, is more preferred.
Revised:  These loci or commonplaces are derived from the third book of Aristotle's Topics , and allow agreement according to the determination of which, between two loci, is more preferred.
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Original:  "real democracy , "  for instance, can be opposed to "apparent democracy, or formal or nominal democracy, or quasi-democracy" (ibid. ).
Revised:  "real democracy " for instance, can be opposed to "apparent democracy, or formal or nominal democracy, or quasi-democracy" (ibid. ).
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Original:  "real democracy , "  for instance, can be opposed to "apparent democracy, or formal or nominal democracy, or quasi-democracy" (ibid. ).
Revised:  "real democracy , " , for instance, can be opposed to "apparent democracy, or formal or nominal democracy, or quasi-democracy" (ibid. ).
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Original:  When abiding by the universal audience, it is difficult to construct a persuasive argument, as the speaker must use general and vague language to be cognizant of all the audience-members  values and ideals.
Revised:  When abiding by the universal audience, it is difficult to construct a persuasive argument, as the speaker must use general and vague language to be cognizant of all the audience-members ' values and ideals.
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Original:  And in regards to  validity of arguments formed around the universal audience, the creation of a universal audience is a tool and constraint for the speaker.
Revised:  And in regards to the validity of arguments formed around the universal audience, the creation of a universal audience is a tool and constraint for the speaker.
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Original:  He plays as a playmaker , but can also play as a striker and winger.
Revised:  He plays as a Striker , but can also play as a striker and winger.
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Original:  He plays as a playmaker , but can also play as a striker and winger.
Revised:  He plays as a playmaker , but can also play as a Winger
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Original:  He plays as a Striker , but can also play as a Winger
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Original: Criticisms Ramos in 2004 Leftist groups have also criticized Ramos for his economic reforms such as privatization, deregulation and trade liberalization, claiming that the economic growth posted during his presidency was "artificial".
Revised:  Ramos in 2004 Leftist groups have also criticized Ramos for his economic reforms such as privatization, deregulation and trade liberalization, claiming that the economic growth posted during his presidency was "artificial".
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Original:  born Fidel Ramos y Valdez;
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Original: Prior to his election as president, Ramos served in the cabinet of President Corazón Aquino, first as chief-of-staff of the Armed Forces of the Philippines (AFP), and later as Secretary of National Defense from 1986 to 1991.
Revised: Prior to his election as president, Ramos served in the cabinet of President Corazon Aquino, first as chief-of-staff of the Armed Forces of the Philippines (AFP), and later as Secretary of National Defense from 1986 to 1991.
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Original: Infobox officeholder | honorific-prefix = His Excellency | honorific-suffix = Fidel Valdez Ramos (;
Revised:  Fidel Valdez Ramos (;
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Original:  this is done through crime mapping which refers to the allocation of individual or multiple crime incidents on a map by utilizing a computer software package such as ArcMap 10.1, a Geographic information system.
Revised:  this is done through crime mapping which refers to the allocation of individual or multiple crime incidents on a map by utilizing a computer software package such as ArcMap 10.1, a Geographic information system.
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Original:  Eck, J. & Weisburb , D. (1995).
Revised:  Eck, J. & Weisburd , D. (1995).
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Original: Crime concentration A Crime concentration is a spatial area to which high levels of crime incidents are attributed.
Revised:  A Crime concentration is a spatial area to which high levels of crime incidents are attributed.
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Original:  After the both crimes and establishments had been geocoded, the maps were overlaid.
Revised:  After both the crimes and establishments had been geocoded, the maps were overlaid.
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Original: Auuthors such as Peter Bearman, Robert Faris, and James Moody have understood the sequence of events in a narrative as a complex event structure.
Revised: Authors such as Peter Bearman, Robert Faris, and James Moody have understood the sequence of events in a narrative as a complex event structure.
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Original:  These research strategies may have to be diversified in order to study aspects such as political influence and other non-institutional features of organisations or groups reported by the author through narration 
Revised:  These research strategies may have to be diversified in order to study aspects such as political influence and other non-institutional features of organisations or groups reported by the author through narration .
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Original: The direction of time is not a trivial thing, but the backbone of the information contained in the narrative itself.
Revised: In order to be an object of study and analysis, time has to be transformed into a causal sequence, and the only way in which this can be done is by narration.Peter Munz, “The historical narrative,” in Companion to Historiography, ed. M. Bentley (London: Routledge, 1997), 870. As a form of description, narrating inevitably requires sequencing in time. The direction of time is not a trivial thing, but the backbone of the information contained in the narrative itself.
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Original: A narrative network is a system which represents complex event sequences or characters’ interactions as depicted by a narrative text.
Revised: A narrative network is a system that represents complex event sequences or characters’ interactions as depicted by a narrative text.
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Original: Voice ", Gérard Genette remarked, in Narrative Discourse: An Essay in Methods (Cornell University Press: 1980). and its testimony as reflected by the text.
Revised: Voice ," Gérard Genette remarked, in Narrative Discourse: An Essay in Methods (Cornell University Press: 1980). and its testimony as reflected by the text.
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Original:  In order to be an object of study and analysis, time has to be transformed into a causal sequence, and the only way in which this can be done is by narration.
Revised:  To be an object of study and analysis, time has to be transformed into a causal sequence, and the only way in which this can be done is by narration.
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Original:  In order to be an object of study and analysis, time has to be transformed into a causal sequence, and the only way in which this can be done is by narration.
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Original:  In order to be an object of study and analysis, time has to be transformed into a causal sequence, and the only way in which this can be done is by narration.
Revised:  In order to be an object of study and analysis, time has to be transformed into a causal sequence, and the only way this can be done is by narration.
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Original:  Far from being a window that must be revealed in order to penetrate into a ‘historical truth,’ each historical document adds to the number of texts that have to be interpreted if an approachable and intelligible picture of a given historical milieu is to be drawn.
Revised:  Far from being a window that must be revealed to penetrate into a ‘historical truth,’ each historical document adds to the number of texts that have to be interpreted if an approachable and intelligible picture of a given historical milieu is to be drawn.
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Original:  Far from being a window that must be revealed in order to penetrate into a ‘historical truth,’ each historical document adds to the number of texts that have to be interpreted if an approachable and intelligible picture of a given historical milieu is to be drawn.
Revised:  Far from being a window that must be revealed in order to penetrate into a ‘historical truth,’ each historical document adds to the number of texts that must be interpreted if an approachable and intelligible picture of a given historical milieu is to be drawn.
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Original:  As pointed out by Peter Munz, “ narrative is the only literary device available which will reflect the past’s time structure.”
Revised:  As pointed out by Peter Munz, “ Narrative is the only literary device available which will reflect the past’s time structure.”
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Original:  The pretension in which history is conceived as the representation of the ‘actual’ should be put aside in order to acknowledge that one can only approach past structures by contrasting them with, or bonding them to, the imaginable world.
Revised:  The pretension that conceives of history as the representation of the ‘actual’ should be put aside in order to acknowledge that one can only approach past structures by contrasting them with, or bonding them to, the imaginable world.
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Original: Hayden White, Tropics of Discourse (Baltimore: Johns Hopkins University Press, 1985), 97-8 Narratives are, thus, structures that contain complex systems in which images of experience are drawn .
Revised: Hayden White, Tropics of Discourse (Baltimore: Johns Hopkins University Press, 1985), 97-8 Narratives are, thus, structures that contain complex systems that draw images of experience are drawn .
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Original: Hayden White, Tropics of Discourse (Baltimore: Johns Hopkins University Press, 1985), 97-8 Narratives are, thus, structures that contain complex systems in which images of experience are drawn .
Revised: Hayden White, Tropics of Discourse (Baltimore: Johns Hopkins University Press, 1985), 97-8 Narratives are, thus, structures that contain complex systems in which images of experience .
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Original:  In order to approach new ways of making sense of narrative, one must first distinguish two different systems that can be found in the narrative structure: the sequence of events and the sequence of the actor's interactions.
Revised:  To approach new ways of making sense of narrative, one must first distinguish two different systems that can be found in the narrative structure: the sequence of events and the sequence of the actor's interactions.
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