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Original:  New York City  is on track to grind to a halt on December 15 when the Transport Workers Union Local 100 contract with the Metropolitan Transportation Authority expires.
Revised: A subway train in New York City is on track to grind to a halt on December 15 when the Transport Workers Union Local 100 contract with the Metropolitan Transportation Authority expires.
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Original:  New York City  is on track to grind to a halt on December 15 when the Transport Workers Union Local 100 contract with the Metropolitan Transportation Authority expires.
Revised:  New York City New York City is on track to grind to a halt on December 15 when the Transport Workers Union Local 100 contract with the Metropolitan Transportation Authority expires.
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Original:  He played for the Bloomfield Cricket and Athletic Club as well as nationally for Ceylon , before Sri Lanka had test statu 
Revised:  He played for the Bloomfield Cricket and Athletic Club as well as nationally for Ceylon , before Sri Lanka had test status. 
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Original: 210px|Fredrick played for Ceylon against India in Ahmedabad in 1965 (Colombo Oval pictured) Norton Fredrick, the Sri Lankan cricketer who played for the national All Ceylon team during the 1960's has died at the age of 73.
Revised: 210px|Fredrick played for Ceylon against India in Ahmedabad in 1965 Norton Fredrick, the Sri Lankan cricketer who played for the national All Ceylon team during the 1960's has died at the age of 73.
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Original: 210px|Fredrick played for Ceylon against India in Ahmedabad in 1965 Norton Fredrick, the Sri Lankan cricketer who played for the national All Ceylon team during the 1960's has died at the age of 73.
Revised: 210px|Fredrick played for Ceylon against India in Ahmedabad in 1965 , the n cricketer who played for the national All Ceylon team during the 1960's has died at the age of 73.
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Original:  He played for the Bloomfield Cricket and Athletic Club as well as nationally for the All Ceylon team, before Sri Lanka had test status.
Revised:  He played for the as well as nationally for the All Ceylon team, before Sri Lanka had test status.
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Original:  During his national career he played for nations such as Pakistan, Australia and India .
Revised:  During his national career he played for nations such as , and .
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Original:  Fredrick's death comes in the same month as Gamini Goonasena , another former Sri Lankan cricketer who died at the age of 8
Revised:  Fredrick's death comes in the same month as , another former Sri Lankan cricketer who died at the age of 8
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Original: 210px|Fredrick played for Ceylon against India in Ahmedabad in 1965 , the Sri Lankan cricketer who played for the national All Ceylon team during the 1960s  has died at the age of 73.
Revised: 210px|Fredrick played for Ceylon against India in Ahmedabad in 1965 , the Sri Lankan cricketer who played for the national All Ceylon team during the 1960s , has died at the age of 73.
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Original:  During the Parliamentary debate on the riots, , the Labour leader, called on Cameron to reconsider cuts to police budgets. described the communities where the rioting occurred as being "left behind" and "cut-off from the economic life-blood of the rest of the country"  and called for solutions to the "deep-seated social problems" In , , three people were arrested by police for the suspicion of using Twitter or BlackBerry Messenger to encourage the rioting.
Revised:  During the Parliamentary debate on the riots, , the Labour leader, called on Cameron to reconsider cuts to police budgets. described the communities where the rioting occurred as being "left behind" and "cut-off from the economic life-blood of the rest of the country" , and called for solutions to the "deep-seated social problems" In , , three people were arrested by police for the suspicion of using Twitter or BlackBerry Messenger to encourage the rioting.
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Original:  "We are working with the police, the intelligence services and industry to look at whether it would be right to stop people communicating via these Web sites and services when we know they are plotting violence, disorder and criminality," said British Prime Minister David Cameron.
Revised:  "We are working with the police, the intelligence services and industry to look at whether it would be right to stop people communicating via these Web sites and services when we know they are plotting violence, disorder and criminality," said Cameron.
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Original:  The New York Times highlighted a speech posted on the Number 10 website: "We will not allow a culture of fear to exist on our streets...
Revised:  The highlighted a speech posted on the Number 10 website: "We will not allow a culture of fear to exist on our streets...
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Original:  The Prime Minister also announced that he would consider using the army to support the police in controlling future rioting, and also that he would consult with CBE who had been the chief of police in and a police commissioner in and . Bratton is quoted as saying that arrests are not the only way to solve societal problems which lead to rioting and unrest: "You can't arrest your way out of the problem."
Revised:  The Prime Minister also announced that he would consider using the to support the police in controlling future rioting, and also that he would consult with CBE who had been the chief of police in and a police commissioner in and . Bratton is quoted as saying that arrests are not the only way to solve societal problems which lead to rioting and unrest: "You can't arrest your way out of the problem."
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Original:  The Prime Minister also announced that he would consider using the army to support the police in controlling future rioting, and also that he would consult with CBE who had been the chief of police in and a police commissioner in and . Bratton is quoted as saying that arrests are not the only way to solve societal problems which lead to rioting and unrest: "You can't arrest your way out of the problem."
Revised:  The Prime Minister also announced that he would consider using the army to support the police in controlling future rioting, and also that he would consult with , CBE, who had been the chief of police in and a police commissioner in and . Bratton is quoted as saying that arrests are not the only way to solve societal problems which lead to rioting and unrest: "You can't arrest your way out of the problem."
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Original:  Riots started in on Saturday night following the fatal shooting by police of Mark Duggan, a 29-year-old taxi driver who the state was in possession of a handgun  but did not fire it.
Revised:  Riots started in on Saturday night after the fatal shooting by police of Mark Duggan, a 29-year-old taxi driver who the state was in possession of a handgun but did not fire it.
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Original:  Riots started in on Saturday night following the fatal shooting by police of Mark Duggan, a 29-year-old taxi driver who the state was in possession of a handgun  but did not fire it.
Revised:  Riots started in on Saturday night following the fatal shooting by police of Mark Duggan, a 29-year-old taxi driver who the state was in possession of a handgun , but did not fire it.
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Original:   " We are working with the police, the intelligence services and industry to look at whether it would be right to stop people communicating via these Web sites and services when we know they are plotting violence, disorder and criminality," said Cameron.
Revised:  The government is " We are working with the police, the intelligence services and industry to look at whether it would be right to stop people communicating via these Web sites and services when we know they are plotting violence, disorder and criminality," said Cameron.
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Original:   " We are working with the police, the intelligence services and industry to look at whether it would be right to stop people communicating via these Web sites and services when we know they are plotting violence, disorder and criminality," said Cameron.
Revised:  " working with the police, the intelligence services and industry to look at whether it would be right to stop people communicating via these Web sites and services when we know they are plotting violence, disorder and criminality," said Cameron.
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Original: Cameron told the House of Commons that there "were simply far too few police deployed on to our streets and the tactics they were using weren't working".
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Original:  It has raised questions about the ethical consequences on internet freedom of speech, and depriving citizens of their civil liberties.
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Original:  Metropolitan Police in Lewisham preparing for the riots.
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Original:  In ,  , three people were arrested by police for the suspicion of using Twitter or BlackBerry Messenger to encourage the rioting.
Revised:  In , England , three people were arrested by police for the suspicion of using Twitter or BlackBerry Messenger to encourage the rioting.
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Original: 210px|Karen Overington in February 2011 , the former n Member of Parliament has died at the age of 59.
Revised: 210px|Karen Overington in February 2011 , the former has died at the age of 59.
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Original:  She died after a long battle with ill health.
Revised:  Her death followed a long battle with ill health.
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Original:  During her political career  Overington worked to improve living standards for the community's disadvantage.
Revised:  During her political career , Overington worked to improve living standards for the community's disadvantage.
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Original:  Overington was the Member of Parliament for for the from 1999 until she stood down in 2010.
Revised:  Overington was the Member of Parliament for with the from 1999 until she stood down in 2010.
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Original:  While , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down  praised her, saying “She epitomised a real local member.”
Revised:  While , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down , praised her, saying “She epitomised a real local member.”
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Original: 210px|Karen Overington in February 2011 , the former has died at the age of 59.
Revised: 210px|Karen Overington in February 2011 Former has died at the age of 59.
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Original:  Opposition leader also commented saying “She stood up for her community, lobbying strongly to deliver better education, health and other services that have made a real difference to families in Ballarat West. ” While , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down, praised her, saying  “ She epitomised a real local member.”
Revised:  Opposition leader also commented : “She stood up for her community, lobbying strongly to deliver better education, health and other services that have made a real difference to families in Ballarat West. ” While , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down, praised her, saying “ She epitomised a real local member.”
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Original:  Opposition leader also commented saying “She stood up for her community, lobbying strongly to deliver better education, health and other services that have made a real difference to families in Ballarat West. ” While , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down, praised her, saying  “ She epitomised a real local member.”
Revised:  Opposition leader also commented saying “She stood up for her community, lobbying strongly to deliver better education, health and other services that have made a real difference to families in Ballarat West. " , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down, praised her, saying “ She epitomised a real local member.”
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Original:  Opposition leader also commented saying “She stood up for her community, lobbying strongly to deliver better education, health and other services that have made a real difference to families in Ballarat West. ” While , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down, praised her, saying  “ She epitomised a real local member.”
Revised:  Opposition leader also commented saying “She stood up for her community, lobbying strongly to deliver better education, health and other services that have made a real difference to families in Ballarat West. ” While , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down, praised her, saying , “ She epitomised a real local member.”
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Original:  Opposition leader also commented saying “She stood up for her community, lobbying strongly to deliver better education, health and other services that have made a real difference to families in Ballarat West. ” While , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down, praised her, saying  “ She epitomised a real local member.”
Revised:  Opposition leader also commented saying “She stood up for her community, lobbying strongly to deliver better education, health and other services that have made a real difference to families in Ballarat West. ” While , the woman who won the parliamentary seat in Ballarat West after Overington stood down, praised her, saying “ she epitomised a real local member.”
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Original: 210px|Karen Overington in February 2011 Former Australian Member of Parliament has died at the age of 59.
Revised:  Former Australian Member of Parliament has died at the age of 59.
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Original:  They inserted a gene into the patients' (the cells normally responsible for ridding the body of foreign pathogens such as viruses) which reprograms the cells to actively seek out and kill cancer cells within the blood.
Revised:  They inserted a gene into the patients' (the cells normally responsible for ridding the body of foreign pathogens such as viruses) , and the gene reprograms the cells to actively seek out and kill cancer cells within the blood.
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Original: Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard Australian leaders hope to achieve a greater understanding of the relationship between politicians , corporations, and the media as they attempt to launch an official government enquiry into media regulation .
Revised: Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard Top Australian government politicians will attempt to launch an official government enquiry into media regulation .
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Original:  The event triggered frank discussion late last month between Prime Minister Julia Gillard and editors of News  Corporation's Australian publishing arm,  .      Ms. Gillard refused to reveal what was discussed in the closed-door meeting earlier this month, but stated it was a “broad ranging discussion…
Revised:  The event triggered frank discussion late last month between Prime Minister Julia Gillard and editors of News Corporation's publishing arm, . Ms. Gillard refused to reveal what was discussed in the closed-door meeting earlier this month, but stated it was a “broad ranging discussion…
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Original:  ” The meeting followed her statement that “hard questions” needed to be answered by News Limited in the wake of the British scandal.
Revised:  The meeting followed her statement that “hard questions” needed to be answered by News Limited in the wake of the British scandal.
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Original:  ” The meeting followed her statement that “hard questions” needed to be answered by News Limited in the wake of the British scandal.
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Original:  The possibility of an enquiry holds strong support in the Australian public , with a Newsstand petition calling for an examination of “how to promote higher standards , protect people’s privacy while guaranteeing the freedom of the press, stimulate a more diverse media marketplace, and ensure that problems and complains can be handled simply, fairly and effectively” .
Revised:  The Australian public has welcomed the call to investigate the Australian media , with a Newsstand petition calling for an examination of “how to promote higher standards , protect people’s privacy while guaranteeing the freedom of the press, stimulate a more diverse media marketplace, and ensure that problems and complains can be handled simply, fairly and effectively” .
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Original:  The possibility of an enquiry holds strong support in the Australian public , with a Newsstand petition calling for an examination of “how to promote higher standards , protect people’s privacy while guaranteeing the freedom of the press, stimulate a more diverse media marketplace, and ensure that problems and complains can be handled simply, fairly and effectively” .
Revised:  The possibility of an enquiry holds strong support in the Australian public , with a Newsstand petition calling for an examination into the standards of reporting, privacy measures, the diversity of the media and regulations regarding the handling of problems and complaints. However, maintaining the freedom of the press is still of high concern .
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Original:  The Newsstand poll found 70 percent of Australians agreed that “ too few people control the media ” in  the country.
Revised:  The Newsstand poll found 70 percent of Australians agreed that “ too few people control the media ” in the 
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Original:  News Limited recently announced they would personally review their expenses to ensure that no payments had been made in an unethical manner.
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Original:  There is no evidence of any unethical behaviour occurring within the Australian media at present
Revised:  There is no evidence of any unethical behaviour within the Australian media at present
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Original: Concerns regarding the behaviour of the Australian media follow the exposure of the News of the World :Category:News Corporation phone hacking scandal|News Corporation phone hacking scandal tabloid newspaper due to unethical phone hacking of top public figures.
Revised: Concerns regarding the behaviour of the Australian media follow the exposure of the News of the World tabloid newspaper due to unethical phone hacking of top public figures.
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Original: Concerns regarding the behaviour of the Australian media follow the exposure of the News of the World tabloid newspaper due to unethical phone hacking of top public figures.
Revised: Concerns regarding the behaviour of the Australian media follow the exposure of the News of the World tabloid newspaper following unethical behaviour, including the phone hacking of top public figures.
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Original: Concerns regarding the behaviour of the Australian media follow the exposure of the News of the World tabloid newspaper following unethical behaviour, including the phone hacking of top public figures.
Revised: Concerns regarding the behaviour of the Australian media follow the exposure of the News of the World tabloid newspaper following the phone hacking of top public figures.
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Original: Concerns regarding the behaviour of the Australian media follow the exposure of the News of the World tabloid newspaper following unethical behaviour, including the phone hacking of top public figures.
Revised: Concerns regarding the behaviour of the Australian media follow the exposure of the News of the World tabloid newspaper following unethical behaviour, including the phone hacking of public figures.
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Original:  Rupert Murdoch, owner of British tabloid News of the World before it was shut down, currently owns more than half of the Australian press through News Corporation's publishing arm, w|News Limited .
Revised:  Rupert Murdoch, owner of British tabloid News of the World before it was shut down, currently owns more than half of the Australian press through News Corporation's publishing arm, News Limited .
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Original:  Federal Communications Minister accused ' News Limited tabloid, "The Daily Telegraph", of staging a public campaign calling for a “regime change” in government.
Revised:  Federal Communications Minister accused News Limited tabloid, "The Daily Telegraph", of staging a public campaign calling for a “regime change” in government.
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Original:  Ms. Gillard refused to reveal what was discussed in the closed-door meeting earlier this month , but stated it was a “broad ranging discussion…
Revised:  Ms. Gillard refused to reveal what was discussed in the closed-door meeting , but stated it was a “broad ranging discussion…
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Original: canvassing a number of topics  .
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Original:  The Australian public has welcomed the call to investigate the Australian media , with a Newsstand petition calling for an examination into the standards of reporting, privacy measures, the diversity of the media and regulations regarding the handling of problems and complaints.
Revised:  The Australian public has welcomed the call to investigate media giants , with a Newsstand petition calling for an examination into the standards of reporting, privacy measures, the diversity of the media and regulations regarding the handling of problems and complaints.
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Original: However, Senator Brown has acknowledged making any changes to media ownership in the country may be impossible.
Revised: However, Senator has acknowledged making any changes to media ownership in the country may be impossible.
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Original:  , who became Valencia's manager in December, has yet to win a league game, and Los Che have not won any of their last eleven La Liga matches.
Revised:  , who became Valencia's manager in December, has yet to win a league game, and the team have not won any of their last eleven La Liga matches.
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Original:  Five minutes later, assisted Suárez, and without a fail, he netted the second goal, Barcelona's 100th goal this season.
Revised:  Five minutes later, assisted Suárez, who netted the second goal, Barcelona's 100th goal this season.
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Original:  Valencia's captain was sent off late in the first half for a foul on Messi in the penalty box, but missed the resulting penalty, hitting the crossbar .
Revised:  Valencia's captain was sent off late in the first half for a foul on Messi in the penalty box, but missed the resulting penalty, hitting the post .
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Original:  The latest operation follows on from 63 carried out last year by Federal Police in conjunction with government organisations, aiming to eliminate corruption  
Revised:  The latest operation follows on from 63 carried out last year by Federal Police in conjunction with government organisations, aiming to eliminate corruption . 
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Original: Deputy Tourism Minister Frederico Silva da Costa was among 33 Brazilian tourism ministers and officials arrested for embezzlement of public funds on Tuesday across Brasilia, Sao Paulo and Macapa .
Revised: Deputy Tourism Minister was among 33 Brazilian tourism ministers and officials arrested for embezzlement of public funds on Tuesday across Brasilia, Sao Paulo and Macapa .
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