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Original:  Alot of them criticized the government's decision to not lower the flag at the Peace Tower on Parliament Hill to honour fallen soldiers.
Revised:  A lot of them criticized the government's decision to not lower the flag at the Peace Tower on Parliament Hill to honour fallen soldiers.
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Original:  Records of telephone calls, letters, and emails to the Prime Minister in four months since he took office on Feb 6.
Revised:  Records of telephone calls, letters, and emails to the Prime Minister reveal.
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Original:  The conflict between the Israel and Hezbollah has left thousands homeless and threatening more.
Revised:  The conflict between Israel and Hezbollah has left thousands homeless and threatening more.
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Original:  Mitri who is the Lebanon's ministry of culture demands a clear statement that Israel must withdraw.
Revised:  Mitri who is Lebanon's ministry of culture demands a clear statement that Israel must withdraw.
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Original:  Yesterday U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice quotes "We're trying to deal with a problem that has been festering and brewing in Lebanon now for years and years and years, and so it's not going to be solved by one resolution in the Security Council."
Revised:  Yesterday U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice was quoted as saying, "We're trying to deal with a problem that has been festering and brewing in Lebanon now for years and years and years, and so it's not going to be solved by one resolution in the Security Council."
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Original:  Related Links United Nations Interim Force in Lebanon Websit
Revised:  External links United Nations Interim Force in Lebanon Websit
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Original:  Mitri who is Lebanon's ministry of culture  demands a clear statement that Israel must withdraw.
Revised:  Mitri who is Lebanon's ministry of culture also demands a clear statement that Israel must withdraw.
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Original:  Rice also emphasized that the resolution is a first step for a better future in the on-going conflict . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% United Nations Interim Force in Lebanon Websit
Revised:  Rice also emphasized that the resolution is a first step for a better future in the on-going conflict External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% United Nations Interim Force in Lebanon Websit
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Original:  Rice also emphasized that the resolution is a first step for a better future in the on-going conflict . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% United Nations Interim Force in Lebanon Websit
Revised:  Rice also emphasized that the resolution is a first step for a better future in the on-going conflict . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% United Nations Interim Force in Lebanon Websit
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Original:  Rice also emphasized that the resolution is a first step for a better future in the on-going conflict . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% United Nations Interim Force in Lebanon Websit
Revised:  Rice also emphasized that the resolution is a first step for a better future in the on-going conflict . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  , head of EU foreign policy, said the bloc is "very concerned" by the situation  and very concerned for the family of the two pilots who are missing".
Revised:  , head of EU foreign policy, said the bloc is "very concerned" by the situation " and very concerned for the family of the two pilots who are missing".
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Original:  The Turks claim the jet mistakenly entered Syrian airspace, but had left again after a warning and was in international airspace when it was attacked    ] 
Revised:  The Turks claim the jet mistakenly entered Syrian airspace, but had left again after a warning and was in international airspace when it was attacked . ] 
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Original:  He predicts some nations "will be very active in arguing for a new resolution from the UN Security Council."
Revised:  He predicts some nations "will be very active in arguing for a new resolution from the Security Council."
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Original:  Their French colleague, , said the destruction "without warning" of an aircraft that "was not carrying arms and was on a routine flight" is "completely unacceptable.    ] 
Revised:  Their French colleague, , said the destruction "without warning" of an aircraft that "was not carrying arms and was on a routine flight" is "completely unacceptable. " ] 
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Original:  Their French colleague, , said the destruction "without warning" of an aircraft that "was not carrying arms and was on a routine flight" is "completely unacceptable.    ] 
Revised:  Their French colleague, , said the destruction "without warning" of an aircraft that "was not carrying arms and was on a routine flight" is "completely unacceptable. or] 
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Original: The EU has today anounced fresh sanctions against Syria: Another person and six organisations were added to the EU's sanctions list, which now imposes asset freezes on 43 groups and over 100 people;
Revised: The EU has today announced fresh sanctions against Syria: Another person and six organisations were added to the EU's sanctions list, which now imposes asset freezes on 43 groups and over 100 people;
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Original:  Their French colleague, , said the destruction  " without warning" of an aircraft that "was not carrying arms and was on a routine flight" is "completely unacceptable."
Revised:  Their French colleague, , said the destruction with " without warning" of an aircraft that "was not carrying arms and was on a routine flight" is "completely unacceptable."
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Original: The United States Geological Survey announced that a magnitude 6.7 earthquake struck near the island nation of Vanuatu at 22:18:55 UTC on August 7  2006, only 75 km (50 miles) east-southeast of Luganville, or 215 km (135 miles) north-northwest of the nation's capital, Port-Vila.
Revised: The United States Geological Survey announced that a magnitude 6.7 earthquake struck near the island nation of Vanuatu at 22:18:55 UTC on August 7 , 2006, only 75 km (50 miles) east-southeast of Luganville, or 215 km (135 miles) north-northwest of the nation's capital, Port-Vila.
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Original: The United States Geological Survey announced that a magnitude 6.7 earthquake struck near the  island nation of Vanuatu   at 22:18:55 UTC on August 7, 2006, only 75 km (50 miles) east-southeast of Luganville, or 215 km (135 miles) north-northwest of the nation's capital, Port-Vila.
Revised: The United States Geological Survey announced that a magnitude 6.7 earthquake struck near the South Pacific island nation of Vanuatu at 22:18:55 UTC on August 7, 2006, only 75 km (50 miles) east-southeast of Luganville, or 215 km (135 miles) north-northwest of the nation's capital, Port-Vila.
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Original: The United States Geological Survey announced that a magnitude 6.7 earthquake struck near the  island nation of Vanuatu   at 22:18:55 UTC on August 7, 2006, only 75 km (50 miles) east-southeast of Luganville, or 215 km (135 miles) north-northwest of the nation's capital, Port-Vila.
Revised: The United States Geological Survey announced that a magnitude 6.7 earthquake struck near the island nation of Vanuatu . at 22:18:55 UTC on August 7, 2006, only 75 km (50 miles) east-southeast of Luganville, or 215 km (135 miles) north-northwest of the nation's capital, Port-Vila.
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Original: The United States Geological Survey announced that a magnitude 6.7 earthquake struck near the  island nation of Vanuatu   at 22:18:55 UTC on August 7, 2006, only 75 km (50 miles) east-southeast of Luganville, or 215 km (135 miles) north-northwest of the nation's capital, Port-Vila.
Revised: The United States Geological Survey announced that a magnitude 6.7 earthquake struck near the island nation of Vanuatu at 22:18:55 UTC on August 7, only 75 km (50 miles) east-southeast of Luganville, or 215 km (135 miles) north-northwest of the nation's capital, Port-Vila.
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Original:  The Pacific Tsunami Warning Center issued a bulletin, saying the earthquake was of magnitude 7.0, but did not expect a widespread tsunami . Magnitude 6.7 - VANUATU, USGS Tsunami bullet
Revised:  The Pacific Tsunami Warning Center issued a bulletin, saying the earthquake was of magnitude 7.0, but did not expect a widespread tsunami Magnitude 6.7 - VANUATU, USGS Tsunami bullet
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Original:  The Pacific Tsunami Warning Center issued a bulletin, saying the earthquake was of magnitude 7.0, but did not expect a widespread tsunami . Magnitude 6.7 - VANUATU, USGS Tsunami bullet
Revised:  The Pacific Tsunami Warning Center issued a bulletin, saying the earthquake was of magnitude 7.0, but did not expect a widespread tsunami . 
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Original: The United States Geological Survey announced that a magnitude 6.7 earthquake struck near the South Pacific island nation of Vanuatu.
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Original:  The experimenters trained the dogs to lie down next to a sample from a cancer patient, and to ignore other samples.
Revised:  The dogs were trained to lie down next to a sample from a cancer patient, and to ignore other samples.
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Original: The samples used were breath samples from 55 patients with lung cancer and 31 with breast cancer — the two types of cancer with the highest mortality rates in the United States* . After the training phase, the dogs' accuracy diagnosis was tested in a double-blind experiment.
Revised: The samples used were breath samples from 55 patients with lung cancer and 31 with breast cancer — the two types of cancer with the highest mortality rates in the United States . After the training phase, the dogs' accuracy diagnosis was tested in a double-blind experiment.
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Original:   Importantly, this was independent of the cancer stage, meaning the dogs were able to pick up the scent of cancer in its early stages.
Revised:  Because these figures seem almost to good to be true, cancer experts are the same time baffled and skeptical. The authors of the study themselves also say replication of the study is needed. Importantly, this was independent of the cancer stage, meaning the dogs were able to pick up the scent of cancer in its early stages.
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Original:   The researchers were inspired by anecdotal reports* about dogs detecting cancer.
Revised:  However, the researchers don't believe this will lead to the use of dogs in the clinic soon, rather they want to find out which chemicals are actually sensed by the canines, because they could be used in laboratory assays. "It's not like someone would start chemotherapy based on a dog test," Dr. Gansler of the American Cancer Society said, "They'd still get a biopsy.". The researchers were inspired by anecdotal reports* about dogs detecting cancer.
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Original:   The researchers were inspired by anecdotal reports* about dogs detecting cancer.
Revised:  The researchers were inspired by anecdotal reports about dogs detecting cancer.
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Original:  When diagnosed too late this form of cancer has a poor survival rate, but in this case early surgery was made possible, and the women survived* . Prior studies showed that breath samples from patients with lung cancer or breast cancer contain distinct biochemical markers.
Revised:  When diagnosed too late this form of cancer has a poor survival rate, but in this case early surgery was made possible, and the women survived . Prior studies showed that breath samples from patients with lung cancer or breast cancer contain distinct biochemical markers.
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Original:  A study published in the British Medical Journal already proved that dogs could use their exquisite sense of smell to detect bladder cancer in urine samples, but they were only correct in 41\% of cases, and another study* provided preliminary evidence that dogs could detect melanomas.
Revised:  A study published in the British Medical Journal already proved that dogs could use their exquisite sense of smell to detect bladder cancer in urine samples, but they were only correct in 41\% of cases, and another study provided preliminary evidence that dogs could detect melanomas.
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Original:  Finally, there are concerns that could arise over liability issues: who would be responsible when the dog makes a mistake* ? Current detection methods for both lung and breast cancer are not flawless.
Revised:  Finally, there are concerns that could arise over liability issues: who would be responsible when the dog makes a mistake ? Current detection methods for both lung and breast cancer are not flawless.
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Original:  Current tests are also expensive so the use of dogs for preliminary cancer testing could prove to be an affordable alternative for countries in the developing world .
Revised:  Current tests are also expensive so the use of dogs for preliminary cancer testing could prove to be an affordable alternative for countries in the developing world 
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Original:  Because these figures seem almost to good to be true, cancer experts are the same time baffled and skeptical.
Revised:  Because these figures seem almost too good to be true, cancer experts are the same time baffled and skeptical.
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Original: Image:YellowLabradorLooking.jpg|Scientists used three Labrador Retrievers with basic behavioral dog training .
Revised: Image:YellowLabradorLooking.jpg|Scientists used three Labrador Retrievers with basic behavioral dog training 
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Original: London - The Countryside Alliance has lost its legal bid to keep hunting with hounds after the High Court said their appeal that the Parliament Act 1949 was invalid was not upheld .
Revised: London - The Countryside Alliance has lost its legal bid to keep hunting with hounds after the High Court said their appeal that the Parliament Act 1949 was invalid . The High Court rejected this, stating that the Act was vaild .
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Original: 16th February 2005 London - The Countryside Alliance has lost its legal bid to keep hunting with hounds after the High Court said their appeal that the Parliament Act 1949 was invalid.
Revised:  London - The Countryside Alliance has lost its legal bid to keep hunting with hounds after the High Court said their appeal that the Parliament Act 1949 was invalid.
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Original:  This means hunting with dogs for foxes, hares and badgers will by illegal on Friday  in England and Wales as correspond to the Hunting Act 2004.
Revised:  This means hunting with dogs for foxes, hares and badgers will by illegal on Friday in England and Wales in accordacne with the Hunting Act 2004.
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Original:  However the CA as said that the police would have difficultly in policing the law.
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Original:  This means hunting with dogs for foxes, hares and badgers will by illegal on Friday 18 February in England and Wales in accordacne with the Hunting Act 2004.
Revised:  This means hunting with dogs for foxes, hares and badgers will be illegal from Friday 18 February in England and Wales in accordacne with the Hunting Act 2004.
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Original:  This means hunting with dogs for foxes, hares and badgers will by illegal on Friday 18 February in England and Wales in accordacne with the Hunting Act 2004.
Revised:  This means hunting with dogs for foxes, hares and badgers will by illegal on Friday 18 February in England and Wales in accordance with the Hunting Act 2004.
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Original:  Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", will be the one who charts a course through this controversial path of research.
Revised:  Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", 
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Original:  Gurian has identified approximately one hundred differences between the male and female brain, all of which being structural differences.
Revised:  has identified approximately one hundred differences between the male and female brain, all of which being structural differences.
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Original:  Gurian comments on this: "Men, because we tend to compartmentalize our communication into a smaller part of the brain, we tend to be better at getting right to the issue, the more female brain (will) gather a lot of material, gather a lot of information, feel a lot, hear a lot, sense a lot."
Revised:  Gurian comments :: "Men, because we tend to compartmentalize our communication into a smaller part of the brain, we tend to be better at getting right to the issue, the more female brain (will) gather a lot of material, gather a lot of information, feel a lot, hear a lot, sense a lot."
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Original:  On the other hand, the scans also show that information flows more freely between the hemispheres of the male brain . Refferenc
Revised:  On the other hand, the scans also show that information flows more freely between the hemispheres of the male brain Refferenc
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Original:  On the other hand, the scans also show that information flows more freely between the hemispheres of the male brain . Refferenc
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Original: Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", has identified approximately one hundred differences between the male and female brain, all of which being structural differences.
Revised: Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", has identified approximately one hundred differences between the male and female brain, all of which are structural differences.
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Original:  Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", has identified approximately one hundred differences between the male and female brain, all of which are structural differences . Gurian comments: "Men, because we tend to compartmentalize our communication into a smaller part of the brain, we tend to be better at getting right to the issue, the more female brain (will) gather a lot of material, gather a lot of information, feel a lot, hear a lot, sense a lot."
Revised:  Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", has claimed to identify approximately one hundred differences between the male and female brain, all of which are structural differences . Gurian comments: "Men, because we tend to compartmentalize our communication into a smaller part of the brain, we tend to be better at getting right to the issue, the more female brain (will) gather a lot of material, gather a lot of information, feel a lot, hear a lot, sense a lot."
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Original:  Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", has identified approximately one hundred differences between the male and female brain, all of which are structural differences . Gurian comments: "Men, because we tend to compartmentalize our communication into a smaller part of the brain, we tend to be better at getting right to the issue, the more female brain (will) gather a lot of material, gather a lot of information, feel a lot, hear a lot, sense a lot."
Revised:  Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", has identified approximately one hundred structural differences between male and female brain, all of which are structural differences . Gurian comments: "Men, because we tend to compartmentalize our communication into a smaller part of the brain, we tend to be better at getting right to the issue, the more female brain (will) gather a lot of material, gather a lot of information, feel a lot, hear a lot, sense a lot."
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Original:  Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", has identified approximately one hundred differences between the male and female brain, all of which are structural differences . Gurian comments: "Men, because we tend to compartmentalize our communication into a smaller part of the brain, we tend to be better at getting right to the issue, the more female brain (will) gather a lot of material, gather a lot of information, feel a lot, hear a lot, sense a lot."
Revised:  Michael Gurian, psychologist and author of "What Could He Be Thinking?", has identified approximately one hundred differences between the male and female brains in a recent study . Gurian comments: "Men, because we tend to compartmentalize our communication into a smaller part of the brain, we tend to be better at getting right to the issue, the more female brain (will) gather a lot of material, gather a lot of information, feel a lot, hear a lot, sense a lot."
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Original:  She comments: " And on that Y chromosome are at least 21 unique genes unique to males which control many of the body's operations down to the level of the cells."
Revised:  She comments: " at least 21 unique genes unique to males which control many of the body's operations down to the level of the cells."
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Original:  On the other hand, the scans also show that information flows more freely between the hemispheres of the male brain  
Revised:  On the other hand, the scans also show that information flows more freely between the hemispheres of the male brain . 
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Original:  On the other hand, the scans also show that information flows more freely between the hemispheres of the male brain  
Revised:  On the other hand, the scans also show that information flows more freely between the hemispheres of the male brain The exact role that brain structure plays in behavior, however, has been an area of considerable contention in science for literally hundreds of years. MIT anthropologist of science Joseph Dumit's study of brain imaging in his book Picturing Personhood: Brain Scans and Biomedical Identity, noted that the apparent "transparency" of such pictures (the appearance that they can be easily interpretted by laymen, when they are often the source of ambiguity and dispute by even highly-trained neurosurgeons) has led to their proliferation as indicators of objective truth in media and in courts of law, and that such conclusions are often knowingly exaggerated by the specialists creating the images for better visual effect
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Original:  Brain Scans and Biomedical Identity, noted that the apparent "transparency" of such pictures (the appearance that they can be easily interpretted by laymen, when they are often the source of ambiguity and dispute by even highly-trained neurosurgeons) has led to their proliferation as indicators of objective truth in media and in courts of law, and that such conclusions are often knowingly exaggerated by the specialists creating the images for better visual effect  
Revised:  Brain Scans and Biomedical Identity, noted that the apparent "transparency" of such pictures (the appearance that they can be easily interpretted by laymen, when they are often the source of ambiguity and dispute by even highly-trained neurosurgeons) has led to their proliferation as indicators of objective truth in media and in courts of law, and that such conclusions are often knowingly exaggerated by the specialists creating the images for better visual effect . 
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Original:  Summers has been criticized by a large number of academics and scientists, as well as by many news publications, in the wake of what he was reported as saying during a conference on January 14 
Revised:  Summers has been criticized by a large number of academics and scientists, as well as by many news publications, in the wake of what he was reported as saying during a conference on January 14. 
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