wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  An investigation by the BBC has revealed that millions of dollars in famine relief aid money, including the money raised from the  Live Aid concert held by Bob Geldof and the supergroup Band Aid was "siphoned off" by Ethiopian rebels to buy weapons.
Revised:  An investigation by the BBC has revealed that millions of dollars in famine relief aid money, including the money raised from the Live Aid concert held by Bob Geldof was "siphoned off" by Ethiopian rebels to buy weapons.
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Original:  Berhe said, "The aid workers were fooled     .
Revised:  Berhe said, "The aid workers were fooled ." .
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Original:  He said the group got their hands on over US$100 million (£66 million) of which 95\%  to buy weapons and bulid-up a hardliner Marxist party inside the rebel movement.
Revised:  He said the group got their hands on over US$100 million (£66 million) of which 95\% went to buy weapons and bulid-up a hardliner Marxist party inside the rebel movement.
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Original:  Many coastern towns were also hit by a tsunami, and Pichilemu was one of them.
Revised:  Many coastal towns were also hit by a tsunami, and Pichilemu was one of them.
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Original:  Central Pichilemu was not severely damaged by the earthquake, but the tsunami did the most destruction.
Revised:  Central Pichilemu was not severely damaged by the earthquake, but the tsunami caused significant destruction.
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Original:  The most of the Agustín Ross architecture that characterized the city,  being 3 of them National Monuments of Chile, were damaged.
Revised:  Most of the Agustín Ross architecture that characterized the city, being 3 of them National Monuments of Chile, were damaged.
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Original:  The most of the Agustín Ross architecture that characterized the city,  being 3 of them National Monuments of Chile, were damaged.
Revised:  The most of the Agustín Ross architecture that characterized the city, three of them being 3 of them National Monuments of Chile, were damaged.
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Original:  The most of the Agustín Ross architecture that characterized the city,  being 3 of them National Monuments of Chile, were damaged.
Revised:  The most of the Agustín Ross architecture that characterized the city, being National Monuments of Chile, were damaged.
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Original:  The Agustín Ross Mirador, famous place in front of the beach, located less than 200 meters from the Fisherman Creek, was completely destroyed , and the famous balastrades it has, were throwed far away .
Revised:  The Agustín Ross Mirador, a famous location in front of the beach, located less than 200 meters from the Fisherman Creek, was completely destroyed , and the famous balastrades it has, were throwed far away .
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Original:  The Agustín Ross Mirador, famous place in front of the beach, located less than 200 meters from the Fisherman Creek, was completely destroyed , and the famous balastrades it has, were throwed far away .
Revised:  The Agustín Ross Mirador, famous place in front of the beach, located less than 200 meters from the Fisherman Creek, was completely destroyed . Its famous balustrades were washed away or thrown asunder .
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Original:  Rural parts of Pichilemu, like Ciruelos, Rodeillos and Espinillos , places where there were many houses made with adobe, and more than 100-years old,  were destroyed or are now uninhabitable.
Revised:  The rural parts of Pichilemu, like Ciruelos, Rodeillos and Espinillos , places where there were many houses made with adobe, and more than 100-years old, were destroyed or are now uninhabitable.
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Original:  Rural parts of Pichilemu, like Ciruelos, Rodeillos and Espinillos , places where there were many houses made with adobe, and more than 100-years old,  were destroyed or are now uninhabitable.
Revised:  Rural parts of Pichilemu, like Ciruelos, Rodeillos and Espinillos feature houses constructed from adobe. Many were more than 100-years old, were destroyed or are now uninhabitable.
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Original:  Rural parts of Pichilemu, like Ciruelos, Rodeillos and Espinillos , places where there were many houses made with adobe, and more than 100-years old,  were destroyed or are now uninhabitable.
Revised:  Rural parts of Pichilemu, like Ciruelos, Rodeillos and Espinillos , places where there were many houses made with adobe, and more than 100-years old, and were destroyed or are now uninhabitable.
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Original:  The most powerful aftershock was produced almost 40 kilometers in front of the coast of Pichilemu, at the 03:10 local time (07:10 UTC) in March 2, with an intensity of 5.5 in the Richter scale, USGS informed .
Revised:  The most powerful aftershock was produced almost 40 kilometers in front of the coast of Pichilemu, at the 03:10 local time (07:10 UTC) in March 2, with an intensity of 5.5 in the Richter scale, according to the USGS .
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Original:  The Intendant of the O'Higgins Region, Juan Núñerz, had a meeting with the Governor of the Cardenal Caro Province, Loreto Puebla, the Mayor of Pichilemu, Roberto Córdova, naval and militar authorities, juntas de vecinos representatives.
Revised:  The Intendant of the O'Higgins Region, Juan Núñerz, had a meeting with the Governor of the Cardenal Caro Province, Loreto Puebla, the Mayor of Pichilemu, Roberto Córdova, and naval and military authorities, juntas de vecinos representatives.
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Original:  They decided to leave the Carabineros police force to mantain the security of the city
Revised:  They decided to leave the Carabineros police force to maintain the security of the city
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Original: The Intendant of the O'Higgins Region, Juan Núñerz , had a meeting with the Governor of the Cardenal Caro Province, Loreto Puebla, the Mayor of Pichilemu, Roberto Córdova, and naval and military authorities, juntas de vecinos representatives.
Revised: The Intendant of the O'Higgins Region, Juan Núñez , had a meeting with the Governor of the Cardenal Caro Province, Loreto Puebla, the Mayor of Pichilemu, Roberto Córdova, and naval and military authorities, juntas de vecinos representatives.
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Original:  The Fisherman Creek, located in front of the beach, was completely destroyed, and its machines are now unusable.
Revised:  The Fishermen Creek, located in front of the beach, was completely destroyed, and its machines are now unusable.
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Original:  The rural parts of Pichilemu, like Ciruelos, Rodeillos and Espinillos feature houses constructed from adobe.
Revised:  The rural parts of Pichilemu, like Ciruelos, Rodeillo and Espinillo feature houses constructed from adobe.
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Original:  Despite the inequality of spending, the US, which accounts for 48\% of the world's military spending, has frequently encouraged China to be more transparent about its military spending, a challenge which China said it was meeting.
Revised:  The US, which accounts for 48\% of the world's military spending, has frequently encouraged China to be more transparent about its military spending, a challenge which China said it was meeting.
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Original: Dave Sandercock and Kirsty Duff.
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Original: Some of the named are Kirsty Duff, from Aberdeenshire, Dave Sandercock, from Edinburgh, both 25, Andre Lanyon, from Guernsey, and Laura Hapgood, both 29.
Revised: Some of the named include Kirsty Duff, from Aberdeenshire, Dave Sandercock, from Edinburgh, both 25, Andre Lanyon, from Guernsey, and Laura Hapgood, both 29.
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Original: With the help of Google's Person Finder , created after the Haiti earthquake to help people find family or friends in Chile , one user, identified as Patricia, claimed that Duff and Sandercock were dead, but the person didn't provide further details.
Revised:  Google's Person Finder , created after the Haiti earthquake to help people find family or friends in Chile , one user, identified as Patricia, claimed that Duff and Sandercock were dead, but the person didn't provide further details.
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Original: With the help of Google's Person Finder , created after the Haiti earthquake to help people find family or friends in Chile , one user, identified as Patricia, claimed that Duff and Sandercock were dead, but the person didn't provide further details.
Revised: With the help of Google's Person Finder was created after the Haiti earthquake to help people find family or friends in Chile , one user, identified as Patricia, claimed that Duff and Sandercock were dead, but the person didn't provide further details.
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Original: With the help of Google's Person Finder , created after the Haiti earthquake to help people find family or friends in Chile , one user, identified as Patricia, claimed that Duff and Sandercock were dead, but the person didn't provide further details.
Revised: With the help of Google's Person Finder , created after the Haiti earthquake to help people find family or friends in Chile . One user, claimed that Duff and Sandercock were dead, but the person didn't provide further details.
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Original:  The Guardian reports that at least two couples from the UK were staying in the resort of Pichilemu, and are among those who are yet to contact their families .
Revised:  The Guardian reports that at least two couples from the UK were staying in the resort of Pichilemu, and are among those who are yet to contact their families 
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Original:  The current death total number in Chile is 799, but the Army says that it could expand to over 1,000
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Original: Image of the exterior of a New York City Subway station A Queens, New York Imam plead guilty to lying to Federal officials , on Thursday.
Revised: Image of the exterior of a New York City Subway station A Queens, New York Imam pleaded guilty to lying to Federal officials , on Thursday.
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Original: Image of the exterior of a New York City Subway station A Queens, New York Imam plead guilty to lying to Federal officials , on Thursday.
Revised: Image of the exterior of a New York City Subway station A Queens, New York Imam plead guilty to lying to federal officials on Thursday.
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Original:  Under the plea deal Afzali must leave the United States within 90-days of leaving prison.
Revised:  Under the plea deal Afzali must leave the United States within 90 days of leaving prison.
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Original:  Zazi , who also plead guilty earlier last month to conspiracy to commit murder, conspiracy to use weapons of mass destruction, and material support for al-Qaeda.
Revised:  Zazi , who also pleaded guilty earlier last month to conspiracy to commit murder, conspiracy to use weapons of mass destruction, and material support for al-Qaeda.
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Original:  Sullenberger was additionally honored at the Obama inauguration and the Super Bowl  
Revised:  Sullenberger was additionally honored at the Obama inauguration and the Super Bowl . 
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Original:  On Wednesday, captain Chesley Sullenberger retired.
Revised: Captain Chesley Sullenberger On Wednesday, captain Chesley Sullenberger retired.
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Original: On Wednesday, captain Chesley Sullenberger retired.
Revised: On Wednesday, Captain Chesley Sullenberger retired.
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Original:  With help from the first responders, all passengers and crewmen on the plane survived with minimal injuries.
Revised:  With help from the crew and first responders on scene, all those on the plane survived with minimal injuries.
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Original:  Following the near disaster, many people have hailed Sullenberger as a hero.
Revised:  Following the near disaster, many people hailed Sullenberger as a hero.
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Original:  Over the past year, he has been involved in writing a book, giving speeches  and appearing before Congess.
Revised:  Over the past year, he has been involved in writing a book, giving speeches , and appearing before Congess.
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Original:  During his testimony to Congress, he talked about pilot safety.
Revised:  During his testimony before Congress, he talked about pilot safety.
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Original:  During his testimony to Congress, he talked about pilot safety.
Revised:  During his testimony to Congress, he spoke about the importance of pilot safety.
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Original:  He was also  the grand marshall at the 2010 Tourament of Roses Parade.
Revised:  He was also the 2010 Tourament of Roses Parade.
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Original:  Sullenberger was additionally honored at the Obama inauguration and the Super Bowl .
Revised:  Sullenberger was additionally hailed at the Obama inauguration and the Super Bowl .
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Original:  Sullenberger was also joined on the flight by his wife, Lorrie, and five passengers from the flight 1549.
Revised:  Sullenberger was joined on the flight by his wife, Lorrie, and five passengers from the flight 1549.
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Original:  Sullenberger was also joined on the flight by his wife, Lorrie, and five passengers from the flight 1549.
Revised:  Sullenberger was also joined on the flight by his wife, Lorrie, and five passengers from Flight 1549.
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Original:  Sullenberger said in a statement  that he will contine to work as an advocate of aviation safety
Revised:  Sullenberger said in a statement , that he will contine to work as an advocate of aviation safety
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Original:  Sullenberger said in a statement  that he will contine to work as an advocate of aviation safety
Revised:  Sullenberger said in a statement that he will contine to work as an advocate for aviation safety
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Original:  Over the past year, he has been involved in writing a book, giving speeches, and appearing before Congess . During his testimony before Congress, he spoke about the importance of pilot safety.
Revised:  Over the past year, he has been involved in writing a book, giving speeches, and appearing before Congress . During his testimony before Congress, he spoke about the importance of pilot safety.
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Original:  He also served as the grand marshal of the 2010 Tourament of Roses Parade.
Revised:  He also served as the grand marshal of the 2010 Tournament of Roses Parade.
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Original: A US Congress panel has passed a resolution describing Turkey's killing of Armenians in World War I as genocide, over objections from the White House.
Revised: A United States Congressional panel has passed a resolution describing Turkey's killing of Armenians in World War I as genocide, over objections from the White House.
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Original:  The passage came even after the White House warned the panel that the vote would harm talks between Turkey and Armenia,  US Secretary of State Hillary Clinton asked the panel not to proceed with the vote.
Revised:  The passage came even after the White House warned the panel that the vote would harm talks between Turkey and Armenia, and US Secretary of State Hillary Clinton asked the panel not to proceed with the vote.
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Original:  These talks which were acknowledged by President Obama earlier this week in a telephone call to Turkish Prime Minister Recep Tayyip Erdogan thanking him for his efforts in the negotiations.
Revised:  These talks which were acknowledged by President Obama earlier this week in a telephone call to Turkish Prime Minister Recep Tayyip Erdoğan thanking him for his efforts in the negotiations.
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Original: Agence France-Presse (AFP) reports that this incident bears the hallmarks of the Taleban;
Revised: Agence France-Presse reports that this incident bears the hallmarks of the Taleban;
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Original:  however, Taleban spokesman Yousuf Ahmadi remarked that "[o]ur friends did not say anything about it, we don't have information about the incident , " as quoted by AFP
Revised:  however, Taleban spokesman Yousuf Ahmadi remarked that "[o]ur friends did not say anything about it, we don't have information about the incident " as quoted by AFP
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Original:  however, Taleban spokesman Yousuf Ahmadi remarked that "[o]ur friends did not say anything about it, we don't have information about the incident , " as quoted by AFP
Revised:  however, Taleban spokesman Yousuf Ahmadi remarked that "[o]ur friends did not say anything about it, we don't have information about the incident , " 
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Original:  An initial fire was reported but was quickly extinguished .
Revised:  initially a fire was reported but was quickly extinguished .
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Original:  An initial fire was reported but was quickly extinguished .
Revised:  An initial fire was reported , but was extinguished prior to the arrival of the fire department .
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Original: Fire crews and police are on scene at the General Mills cereal plant in Buffalo, New York after receiving a call that there had been an explosion on the 4th floor of the plant .
Revised: Production was temporarily halted at the General Mills cereal plant in Buffalo, New York after receiving a call that there had been an explosion on the 4th floor of the plant .
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Original:  The explosion has  forced the company to shut down all of their mills and power to most of their facility .
Revised:  The explosion has The explosion forced the company to shut down all of their mills and power to most of their facility .
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Original:  The explosion  forced the company to shut down all of their mills and power to most of their facility for a short time as a precaution . Production and normal operations began to resume around 12:15 a.m..
Revised:  The explosion forced the company to shut down operations for a short time as a precaution . Production and normal operations began to resume around 12:15 a.m..
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Original:  The explosion  forced the company to shut down all of their mills and power to most of their facility for a short time as a precaution . Production and normal operations began to resume around 12:15 a.m..
Revised:  The explosion forced the company to shut down all of their mills and power to most of their facility for a short time as a precaution 
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Original: One of the sources said that Bedell was seen on a surveillance video near the Pentagon talking to another man.
Revised:  Bedell was seen on a surveillance video near the Pentagon talking to another man.
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Original:  " He refused to identify the shooter.
Revised:  He refused to identify the shooter.
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Original:  Pentagon entrances were locked shortly after the shooting at 6:40 p.m.local time during the evening rush hour but all were reopened with the exception of the Pentagon Metro entrance which is adjacent to the main entrance of the Pentagon in Virginia, just across the Potomac River from Washington .
Revised:  Pentagon entrances were locked shortly after the shooting , during the evening rush hour but all were reopened with the exception of the Pentagon Metro entrance which is adjacent to the main entrance of the Pentagon in Virginia, just across the Potomac River from Washington .
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Original:  The attacker has been confirmed as 36-year-old John Patrick Bedell of Hollister, California.
Revised:  The attacker has been identified as 36 year old John Patrick Bedell of Hollister, California.
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Original:  The suspect is critically injured as he was not wearing a bullet-proof vest.
Revised:  The suspect was critically injured as he was not wearing a bullet-proof vest.
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Original:  Keevil added, "About 6:40 tonight, a person came [to] the Pentagon . . . area . . . [and] appeared to be pretty calm.
Revised:  Keevill added, "About 6:40 tonight, a person came [to] the Pentagon . . . area . . . [and] appeared to be pretty calm.
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Original:  As the officers started to ask him for his pass . . . he drew a weapon from his pocket and started shooting. . . . He did not say anything." Keevil confirmed that the shooter was a American citizen but denied knowledge of any motive behind the shooting.
Revised:  As the officers started to ask him for his pass . . . he drew a weapon from his pocket and started shooting. . . . He did not say anything." Keevill confirmed that the shooter was a American citizen but denied knowledge of any motive behind the shooting.
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Original:   Pentagon entrances were locked shortly after the shooting, during the evening rush hour but all were reopened with the exception of the Pentagon Metro entrance which is adjacent to the main entrance of the Pentagon in Virginia, just across the Potomac River.
Revised:  Pentagon entrances were locked shortly after the shooting, during the evening rush hour but all were reopened with the exception of the Pentagon Metro entrance which is adjacent to the main entrance of the Pentagon in Virginia, across the Potomac River.
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Original:   " The officers acted very quickly and decisively to neutralize him as a threat , " Keevill said.
Revised:  " quickly and decisively to neutralize him as a threat , " Keevill said.
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Original:   " The officers acted very quickly and decisively to neutralize him as a threat , " Keevill said.
Revised:  " The officers acted very quickly and decisively to neutralize him as a threat " Keevill said.
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Original: Chief of  Pentagon Force Protection Agency Richard S. Keevill conducted a press conference two hours after the incident.
Revised: Chief of the Pentagon Force Protection Agency Richard S. Keevill conducted a press conference two hours after the incident.
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Original:  According to the Pentagon security officers the man calmly approached an entrance to the building near a commuting station, pulled a gun from his coat pocket and opened fire at them.
Revised:  According to the officers, the man calmly approached an entrance to the building near a commuting station, pulled a gun from his coat pocket and opened fire at them.
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Original:  According to the Pentagon security officers the man calmly approached an entrance to the building near a commuting station, pulled a gun from his coat pocket and opened fire at them.
Revised:  According to the Pentagon security officers the man calmly approached an entrance to the building near the Metro station, pulled a gun from his coat pocket and opened fire at them.
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Original:  The attackers were able to gain entry to the building and started throwing bombs   .
Revised:  The attackers were able to gain entry to the building and started throwing bombs . .
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Original: Nigerian President Jonathan Goodluck described the incident as a "dastardly attack".
Revised: Nigerian President Goodluck Jonathan described the incident as a "dastardly attack".
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Original:  He has already declared a state of emergency in three Northern states, and is facing criticism along with the country's armed forces for their failing to prevent extremist attacks.
Revised:  He has already declared a state of emergency in three Northern states, and is facing criticism along with the country's armed forces for their failure to prevent extremist attacks.
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Original: Officials said at least 15 people were killed in an attack on a teachers training college in the Northern city of by a group of armed gunmen on Wednesday.
Revised: Officials said at least fifteen people were killed in an attack on a teachers training college in the Northern city of by a group of armed gunmen on Wednesday.
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Original:  News agencies have reported that while there has been no claim of responsibility, suspicion will likely fall on the Islamist extremist group .
Revised:  News agencies have reported while there has been no claim of responsibility, suspicion will likely fall on the Islamist extremist group .
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