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Original: In a televised address ON Sunday, with army chief General Anupong Paochinda at his side, the prime minister dismissed the offer made by the United Democratic Front against Dictatorship, saying such issues could not be resolved in such a short period of time, and "because they use violence and intimidation.
Revised: In a televised address on Sunday, with army chief General Anupong Paochinda at his side, the prime minister dismissed the offer made by the United Democratic Front against Dictatorship, saying such issues could not be resolved in such a short period of time, and "because they use violence and intimidation.
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Original:  In reaction, the UDD , also called the Red Shirts , maintained an earlier call for parliament to be dissolved immediately.
Revised:  In reaction, the UDD ( also called the Red Shirts , maintained an earlier call for parliament to be dissolved immediately.
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Original:  In reaction, the UDD , also called the Red Shirts , maintained an earlier call for parliament to be dissolved immediately.
Revised:  In reaction, the UDD , also called the Red Shirts ) maintained an earlier call for parliament to be dissolved immediately.
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Original:  UDD leaders have repeatedly warned supporters rallying in central Bangkok's retail and business area of the threat of a new government crackdown.
Revised:  UDD leaders have repeatedly warned supporters rallying in central Bangkok's retail and business areas of the threat of a new government crackdown.
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Original:  There have been two large incidents of street violence in the past month or so, resulting in 26 deaths and injuring hundreds of people.
Revised:  There have been two large incidents of street violence in the past month or so, resulting in 26 deaths and injuries to hundreds of people.
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Original:  In reaction, the UDD ( also called the Red Shirts ) maintained an earlier call for parliament to be dissolved immediately.
Revised:  In reaction, the UDD , also called the Red Shirts ) maintained an earlier call for parliament to be dissolved immediately.
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Original:  In reaction, the UDD ( also called the Red Shirts ) maintained an earlier call for parliament to be dissolved immediately.
Revised:  In reaction, the UDD ( also called the Red Shirts , maintained an earlier call for parliament to be dissolved immediately.
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Original: File photo of Ahisit VejjajivaIn a televised address on Sunday, with army chief General Anupong Paochinda at his side, the prime minister dismissed the offer made by the United Democratic Front against Dictatorship, saying such issues could not be resolved in such a short period of time, and "because they use violence and intimidation.
Revised: File photo of Abhisit VejjajivaIn a televised address on Sunday, with army chief General Anupong Paochinda at his side, the prime minister dismissed the offer made by the United Democratic Front against Dictatorship, saying such issues could not be resolved in such a short period of time, and "because they use violence and intimidation.
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Original:   Agence France-Presse (AFP) news service reports the dead body was that of a seventeen-year-old student.
Revised:  The Agence France-Presse (AFP) news service reports the dead body was that of a seventeen-year-old student.
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Original: In a gun battle that took place between Pakistani soldiers and insurgents in Sunday, eight insurgents were killed and ten others were injured.
Revised: In a gun battle that took place between Pakistani soldiers and insurgents on Sunday, eight insurgents were killed and ten others were injured.
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Original:  The incident occurred when about 40 rebels attacked a checkpoint near  Goain village in the Orakzai district of the North-West Frontier Province of the country.
Revised:  The incident occurred when about 40 rebels attacked a checkpoint near the Goain village in the Orakzai district of the North-West Frontier Province of the country.
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Original:  Two security officials confirmed  heavy artillery had been used for the battle, in which eight rebels died.
Revised:  Two security officials confirmed that heavy artillery had been used for the battle, in which eight rebels died.
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Original:  Sajjad Ahmed, another local official told Agence France-Presse (AFP) news service that two underground hideouts of the rebels had also been captured by the army.
Revised:  Sajjad Ahmed, another local official told Agence France-Presse (AFP) that two underground hideouts of the rebels had also been captured by the army.
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Original:  A senior military official confirmed  the death toll was eight.
Revised:  A senior military official confirmed that the death toll was eight.
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Original:  He is an afghan hound.
Revised:  He is an Afghan hound.
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Original:  A protest on the Japanese island of Okinawa calling for the closure of a United States military base attracted close to 100,000 people today, after speculation that the Japanese government may back out of an election promise to force it off the island entirely.
Revised:  A protest on the Japanese island of Okinawa calling for the closure of a United States military base attracted almost 100,000 people today, after speculation that the Japanese government may back out of an election promise to force it off the island entirely.
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Original:  Marine Corps Air Station Futenma The base, Marine Corps Air Station Futenma, has long been criticized by the Japanese public , as it and other bases on the island have served as the location for most of America's 47,000 troops stationed in Japan.
Revised:  The base, Marine Corps Air Station Futenma, has long been criticized by the Japanese public , as it and other bases on the island have served as the location for most of America's 47,000 troops stationed in Japan.
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Original:  Marine Corps Air Station Futenma The base, Marine Corps Air Station Futenma, has long been criticized by the Japanese public , as it and other bases on the island have served as the location for most of America's 47,000 troops stationed in Japan.
Revised:  Marine Corps Air Station Futenma The base, Marine Corps Air Station Futenma, has been long criticized by the Japanese public , as it and other bases on the island have served as the location for most of America's 47,000 troops stationed in Japan.
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Original:  Marine Corps Air Station Futenma The base, Marine Corps Air Station Futenma, has long been criticized by the Japanese public , as it and other bases on the island have served as the location for most of America's 47,000 troops stationed in Japan.
Revised:  Marine Corps Air Station Futenma The base, Marine Corps Air Station Futenma, has long been criticized by the Japanese people , as it and other bases on the island have served as the location for most of America's 47,000 troops stationed in Japan.
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Original:  The US military presense on the island is seen by some as a legacy of Japan's defeat in World War II by the US. Japan's current prime minister, Yukio Hatoyama, pledged to move the base off of Okinawa entirely, and transfer 8,000 military personnel to Guam, superseding a 2006 agreement between the Japanese and American governments to move the base to a less urbanized part of Okinawa.
Revised:  The US military presence on the island is seen by some as a legacy of Japan's defeat in World War II by the US. Japan's current prime minister, Yukio Hatoyama, pledged to move the base off of Okinawa entirely, and transfer 8,000 military personnel to Guam, superseding a 2006 agreement between the Japanese and American governments to move the base to a less urbanized part of Okinawa.
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Original:  Opposition leaders in Japan have demanded that Hatoyama resign as prime minister if he cannot make a decision by the end of May.
Revised:  Opposition leaders in Japan have demanded that Hatoyama should resign as Prime Minister if he does not make a decision by the end of May.
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Original:  According to media reports, Japanese Foreign Minister Katsuya Okada had met with U.S. Ambassador John Roos last week, and had told Roos that Tokyo was in favor of  most of the 2006 deal, a charge which Okada denied, saying that he had met with Roos, but that no concessions on the matter had been made.
Revised:  According to media reports, Japanese Foreign Minister Katsuya Okada had met with U.S. Ambassador John Roos last week, and had told Roos that Tokyo was in favor of the most of the 2006 deal, a charge which Okada denied, saying that he had met with Roos, but that no concessions on the matter had been made.
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Original:  Hatoyama said that he would make a decision about the matter by the end of May, and on Friday told Parliament that he would " stake his job" to do so.
Revised:  Hatoyama said that he would make a decision about the matter by the end of May, and on Friday told Parliament that he would " stshitake his job" to do so.
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Original:  I never thought of killing people.  
Revised:  I never thought of killing people. " 
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Original: Osman is reported to have stated : "I am against war...
Revised: Osman is reported to have said : "I am against war...
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Original:  " His intention may have been to draw attention to the war in Iraq
Revised:  His intention may have been to draw attention to the war in Iraq
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Original:  " His intention may have been to draw attention to the war in Iraq
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Original: A great fire has swept suburban Manila, Philippines, has destroyed many houses and has left many houseless .
Revised: A large fire has swept suburban Manila, Philippines, has destroyed many houses and has left many houseless .
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Original: A great fire has swept suburban Manila, Philippines, has destroyed many houses and has left many houseless .
Revised: A great fire has swept suburban Manila, Philippines, has destroyed many houses and has left many homeless .
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Original:  At least two huundred fire engines have been sent to extinguish the flames.
Revised:  At least two hundred fire engines have been sent to extinguish the flames.
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Original:  No fatalities were reported,  one resident has suffered first degree burns and two people were reported missing, a Manila fire marshal reported to BBC News.
Revised:  No fatalities were reported, although one resident has suffered first degree burns and two people were reported missing, a Manila fire marshal reported to BBC News.
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Original:  No fatalities were reported,  one resident has suffered first degree burns and two people were reported missing, a Manila fire marshal reported to BBC News.
Revised:  No fatalities were reported, one resident has suffered first degree burns and two people were reported missing, a Manila fire marshal told BBC News.
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Original:  The fire started on Sunday afternoon and it was still burning on nightfall, meanwhile people were trying to rescue some of their belongings.
Revised:  The fire started on Sunday afternoon and was still burning on nightfall, meanwhile people were trying to rescue some of their belongings.
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Original:  The fire started on Sunday afternoon and it was still burning on nightfall, meanwhile people were trying to rescue some of their belongings.
Revised:  The fire started on Sunday afternoon and it was still burning at nightfall, while people were trying to rescue some of their belongings.
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Original:  "We failed to save anything except our clothes," told Glen Sardon, a resident to the Associated Press news agency.
Revised:  "We failed to save anything except our clothes," said Glen Sardon, a resident to the Associated Press news agency.
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Original:  Slum areas in the area are exposed constantly to fires because the houses, often made from wood, are built very closer together
Revised:  Slum areas in the city are exposed constantly to fires because the houses, often made from wood, are built very closer together
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Original:  Slum areas in the area are exposed constantly to fires because the houses, often made from wood, are built very closer together
Revised:  Slum areas in the area are exposed constantly to fires because the houses, often made from wood, are in close proximity to one another
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Original: The fire has spread due to strong winds and summer high temperatures.
Revised: The fire spread quickly due to strong winds and summer high temperatures.
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Original:  No fatalities were reported, although one resident has suffered first degree burns and two people were reported missing, a Manila fire marshal told BBC News.
Revised:  No fatalities were reported, although one resident suffered first degree burns and two people were reported missing, a Manila fire marshal told BBC News.
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Original:  "We failed to save anything except our clothes," said Glen Sardon, a resident to the Associated Press.
Revised:  "We failed to save anything except our clothes," said resident Glen Sardon to the Associated Press.
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Original:  No fatalities were reported, although one resident suffered first degree burns and two people were reported missing, a Manila fire marshal told BBC News  .
Revised:  No fatalities were reported, although one resident suffered first degree burns ; a Manila fire marshal told BBC News .
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Original:  a Manila fire marshal told w:BBC News |BBC News two people were reported missing as well.
Revised:  a Manila fire marshal told BBC News two people were reported missing as well.
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Original: The Gippsland Football League is considered one of the "major leagues" controlled by the Victorian Country Football League , the governing body of Australian rules football in regional Victoria, Australia.
Revised: The Gippsland Football League is considered one of the "major leagues" controlled by the , the governing body of Australian rules football in regional Victoria, Australia.
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Original: A warning was sent out by Osama Bin Laden's lieutenant Ayman al-Zawahri saying that more attacks will be carried out because of the Tony Blair's foreign policy decisions.
Revised: A warning was sent out by Osama Bin Laden's lieutenant Ayman al-Zawahri saying that more attacks will be carried out because of Tony Blair's foreign policy decisions.
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Original:  The comments were from a videotape and it was shown on the satellite television channel al-Jazeera.
Revised:  The comments were from a videotape shown on the satellite television channel al-Jazeera.
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Original: A warning was sent out by Osama Bin Laden's lieutenant Ayman al-Zawahri saying that more attacks will be carried out because of Tony Blair's foreign policy decisions.
Revised: A warning has been sent out by Osama Bin Laden's lieutenant Ayman al-Zawahri saying that more attacks will be carried out because of Tony Blair's foreign policy decisions.
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Original:  Tony Blair has denied the policies caused the July 7 bomb attacks.
Revised:  Tony Blair has denied that his policies caused the July 7 bomb attacks.
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Original:  Downing Street have refused to comment on the tape
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Original:  Downing Street has refused to comment on the tape  
Revised:  Downing Street has refused to comment on the tape . 
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Original:  And he said: "What you have seen, O Americans, in New York and Washington and the losses you are having in Afghanistan and Iraq, in spite of all the media blackout, are only the losses of the intial clashes, If you continue the same policy of aggresion against Muslims, God willing, you will see the horror that will make you forget what you had seen in Vietnam."
Revised:  And he said: "What you have seen, O Americans, in New York and Washington and the losses you are having in Afghanistan and Iraq, in spite of all the media blackout, are only the losses of the initial clashes, If you continue the same policy of aggresion against Muslims, God willing, you will see the horror that will make you forget what you had seen in Vietnam."
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Original:  And he said: "What you have seen, O Americans, in New York and Washington and the losses you are having in Afghanistan and Iraq, in spite of all the media blackout, are only the losses of the intial clashes, If you continue the same policy of aggresion against Muslims, God willing, you will see the horror that will make you forget what you had seen in Vietnam."
Revised:  And he said: "What you have seen, O Americans, in New York and Washington and the losses you are having in Afghanistan and Iraq, in spite of all the media blackout, are only the losses of the intial clashes, If you continue the same policy of aggression against Muslims, God willing, you will see the horror that will make you forget what you had seen in Vietnam."
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Original:  Police were on high alert today in London, with 6,000 officers watching for a repeat of the attacks 2 andd 4 weeks ago and they continue to investigate the 7 July bombings and are holding 15 people in connection with the 21 July attempt
Revised:  Police were on high alert today in London, with 6,000 officers watching for a repeat of the attacks 2 and 4 weeks ago and they continue to investigate the 7 July bombings and are holding 15 people in connection with the 21 July attempt
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Original: Singer Bret Michaels has remained in a critical condition after suffering a brain haemorrhage.
Revised: Singer has remained in a critical condition after suffering a brain haemorrhage.
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Original:  Michaels also recently recorded a song with teen singer Miley Cyrus .
Revised:  Michaels also recently recorded a song with teen singer .
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Original:  The singer can currently be seen on US television on reality show The Celebrity Apprentice .
Revised:  The singer can currently be seen on US television on reality show The .
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Original:  The show ’ s host Donald Trump also sent Michaels his well wishes
Revised:  The show ' s host Donald Trump also sent Michaels his well wishes
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Original:  There is no doubt that their return to the field will be enormously challenging, particularly for those who were present on the SCG last week," head Alistair Nicholson said.
Revised:  There is no doubt that their return to the field will be enormously challenging, particularly for those who were present on the SCG last week," head said.
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Original:  The , in , will host the second Test from December 17.
Revised:  The , in , is to host the second Test from December 17.
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Original:  Ths will allow a minimum break of five days before the at the . 's New Year's Test has been delayed to begin January 6.
Revised:  This allows a minimum break of five days before the at the . 's New Year's Test has been delayed to begin January 6.
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Original:  The limited overs schedule, due to start on January 12, is uneffected 
Revised:  The limited overs schedule, due to start on January 12, is unaffected. 
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Original: The , in , is to host the second Test from December 17.
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Original:  The limited overs schedule, due to start on January 12, is unaffected.
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Original: The 2014-15 Test series between and has been reshuffled, announced Monday night , after the scheduled first match was postponed due to a death of Australia's own Phillip Hughes and is now scheduled to host the first match from Dec. 9. Hughes was hit in the back of a head during a game and suffered from vertebral artery dissection and passed away two days later.
Revised: The 2014-15 Test series between and has been reshuffled, announced Monday night after the scheduled first match was postponed due to a death of Australia's own Phillip Hughes and is now scheduled to host the first match from Dec. 9. Hughes was hit in the back of a head during a game and suffered from vertebral artery dissection and passed away two days later.
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Original: The 2014-15 Test series between and has been reshuffled, announced Monday night , after the scheduled first match was postponed due to a death of Australia's own Phillip Hughes and is now scheduled to host the first match from Dec. 9. Hughes was hit in the back of a head during a game and suffered from vertebral artery dissection and passed away two days later.
Revised: The 2014-15 Test series between and has been reshuffled, announced Monday night , after the scheduled first match was postponed due to a death of Australia's own Phillip Hughes . is now scheduled to host the first match from Dec. 9. Hughes was hit in the back of a head during a game and suffered from vertebral artery dissection and passed away two days later.
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Original: The 2014-15 Test series between and has been reshuffled, announced Monday night , after the scheduled first match was postponed due to a death of Australia's own Phillip Hughes and is now scheduled to host the first match from Dec. 9. Hughes was hit in the back of a head during a game and suffered from vertebral artery dissection and passed away two days later.
Revised: The 2014-15 Test series between and has been reshuffled, announced Monday night , after the scheduled first match was postponed due to a death of Australia's own Phillip Hughes and is now scheduled to host the first match on Dec. 9. Hughes was hit in the back of a head during a game and suffered from vertebral artery dissection and passed away two days later.
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Original:  's New Year's Test has been delayed to begin January 6.
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Original:  The schedule, due to start on January 12, is unaffected.
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Original:  's New Year's Test has been delayed to begin Jan. 6. The schedule, due to start on Jan. 12, is unaffected.
Revised:  's New Year's Test has been delayed to begin January 6. The schedule, due to start on Jan. 12, is unaffected.
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Original:  's New Year's Test has been delayed to begin Jan. 6. The schedule, due to start on Jan. 12, is unaffected.
Revised:  's New Year's Test has been delayed to begin Jan. 6. The schedule, due to start on January 12, is unaffected.
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Original:  A timetable for withdrawal is not practical because it would give the enemy a tactical event upon which to make plans .
Revised:  A timetable for withdrawal is not practical because it would give the enemy a tactical event upon which to plan .
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Original: "  We're at war …
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Original:  We're at war against an enemy that, since that day, has continued to kill." 03-08-2005 Speaking in his native state of Texas, President Bush in a Wednesday address to the American Legislative Exchange Council in the city of Grapevine said, "The violence in recent days in Iraq is a grim reminder of the enemies we face."
Revised:  We're at war against an enemy that, since that day, has continued to kill." 03-08-2005 Speaking in Texas, President Bush in a Wednesday address to the American Legislative Exchange Council in the city of Grapevine said, "The violence in recent days in Iraq is a grim reminder of the enemies we face."
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