wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
Revised:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome . Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
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Original:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
Revised:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears . Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
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Original:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
Revised:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted .
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Original:  The activity becomes "autotelic" (an end in itself, done for its own sake)  His studies also show that flow is greater during work while happiness is greater during leisure activities.
Revised:  The activity becomes "autotelic" (an end in itself, done for its own sake) . His studies also show that flow is greater during work while happiness is greater during leisure activities.
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Original:  When happiness comes to us so easily, it comes with a price we may not realize.
Revised:  When happiness comes so easily, it comes with a price we may not realize.
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Original:  When happiness comes to us so easily, it comes with a price we may not realize.
Revised:  When happiness comes to us so easily, it comes with a price one may not realize.
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Original:  However, complete mental health is a combination of high emotional well-being, high psychological well-being, and high social well-being , along with low mental illness.
Revised:  However, complete mental health is a combination of high emotional well-being, high psychological well-being, high social well-being , along with low mental illness.
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Original:  However, complete mental health is a combination of high emotional well-being, high psychological well-being, and high social well-being , along with low mental illness.
Revised:  However, complete mental health is a combination of high emotional well-being, high psychological well-being, and high social well-being and low mental illness.
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Original:  In 2005  a study conducted by Andrew Steptow and Michael Marmot at University College London , found that happiness is related to biological markers that play an important role in health.
Revised:  In 2005 , a study conducted by Andrew Steptow and Michael Marmot at University College London , found that happiness is related to biological markers that play an important role in health.
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Original:  In 2005  a study conducted by Andrew Steptow and Michael Marmot at University College London , found that happiness is related to biological markers that play an important role in health.
Revised:  In 2005 a study conducted by Andrew Steptow and Michael Marmot at University College London found that happiness is related to biological markers that play an important role in health.
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Original:  Repeating their studies three years later  Steptow and Marmot found that participants who scored high in positive emotion continued to have lower levels of cortisol and fibrinogen, as well as a lower heart rate.
Revised:  Repeating their studies three years later , Steptow and Marmot found that participants who scored high in positive emotion continued to have lower levels of cortisol and fibrinogen, as well as a lower heart rate.
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Original:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years and Richard Davidson's bestseller (2012) The Emotional Life of Your Brain  argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
Revised:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years , while Richard Davidson's bestseller (2012) The Emotional Life of Your Brain argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
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Original:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years and Richard Davidson's bestseller (2012) The Emotional Life of Your Brain  argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
Revised:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years and Richard Davidson's bestseller The Emotional Life of Your Brain argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
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Original:  In adolescence There has been a significant focus in past research on adulthood, in regards to well-being and development , and although eudaimonia is not a new field of study, there has been little research done in the areas of adolescence and youth.
Revised:  In adolescence There has been a significant focus in past research on adulthood, in regards to well-being and development and although eudaimonia is not a new field of study, there has been little research done in the areas of adolescence and youth.
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Original:  Additionally , there is growing debate that assumptions that a single population estimate of age-related changes in well-being truly reflects the lived experiences of older adults has been questioned.
Revised:  Also , there is growing debate that assumptions that a single population estimate of age-related changes in well-being truly reflects the lived experiences of older adults has been questioned.
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Original:  Following a traumatic event, such as rape, incest, cancer, attack, or combat, "it is normal to experience debilitating symptoms of depression and anxiety."
Revised:  Following a traumatic event, for instance rape, incest, cancer, attack, or combat, "it is normal to experience debilitating symptoms of depression and anxiety."
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Original:  A person who shows PTG , however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time , and then show an increase in well-being that is higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
Revised:  A person who shows PTG however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time , and then show an increase in well-being that is higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
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Original:  A person who shows PTG , however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time , and then show an increase in well-being that is higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
Revised:  A person who shows PTG , however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time and then show an increase in well-being that is higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
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Original:  A person who shows PTG , however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time , and then show an increase in well-being that is higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
Revised:  A person who shows PTG , however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time , and then show an increase in well-being , higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
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Original:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: Understand the response to trauma Reduce anxietyUtilize constructive disclosureCreate a trauma narrative Articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
Revised:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: understand the response to trauma Reduce anxietyUtilize constructive disclosureCreate a trauma narrative Articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
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Original:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: Understand the response to trauma Reduce anxietyUtilize constructive disclosureCreate a trauma narrative Articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
Revised:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: Understand the response to trauma , reduce anxiety, utilize constructive disclosure, create a trauma narrative Articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
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Original:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: Understand the response to trauma Reduce anxietyUtilize constructive disclosureCreate a trauma narrative Articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
Revised:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: Understand the response to trauma Reduce anxietyUtilize constructive disclosureCreate a trauma narrative , and articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
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Original:  While a 2012 study found that wellbeing was higher for people who experienced both positive and negative emotions, evidence also suggests negative emotions can be damaging.
Revised:  While a 2012 study found that wellbeing was higher for people who experienced both positive and negative emotions, evidence suggests negative emotions can be damaging.
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Original:  The encountered benefits of flourishing suggest a definition: "[flourishing] people experience high levels of emotional, psychological and social well being due to vigor and vitality, self-determination, continuous self-growth , close relationships and a meaningful and purposeful life" (Siang-Yang, 2006, p. 70).
Revised:  The encountered benefits of flourishing suggest a definition: "[flourishing] people experience high levels of emotional, psychological and social well being due to vigor and vitality, self-determination, continuous self- growth , close relationships and a meaningful and purposeful life" (Siang-Yang, 2006, p. 70).
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Original:  This includes an ability of emotional hedonic adaptation , an idea suggesting that beauty, fame and money do not generally have lasting effects on happiness (this effect has also been called the hedonic treadmill).
Revised:  This includes an ability of emotional Hedonic Adaptation , an idea suggesting that beauty, fame and money do not generally have lasting effects on happiness (this effect has also been called the hedonic treadmill).
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Original:  This includes an ability of emotional hedonic adaptation , an idea suggesting that beauty, fame and money do not generally have lasting effects on happiness (this effect has also been called the hedonic treadmill).
Revised:  This includes an ability of emotional hedonic adaptation , an idea suggesting that beauty, fame and money do not generally have lasting effects on happiness (this effect has also been called the Hedonic treadmill).
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Original:  People whose set points lean toward positive emotionality tend to be cheerful most of the time , and those whose set points lean toward negative emotionality tend to gravitate toward pessimism and anxiety.
Revised:  People whose set points lean toward positive emotionality tend to be cheerful most of the time and those whose set points lean toward negative emotionality tend to gravitate toward pessimism and anxiety.
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Original:  People whose set points lean toward positive emotionality tend to be cheerful most of the time , and those whose set points lean toward negative emotionality tend to gravitate toward pessimism and anxiety.
Revised:  People whose set points lean toward positive emotionality tend to be cheerful most of the time , and those whose set points tend to be more negative emotionality tend to gravitate toward pessimism and anxiety.
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Original:  Lykken found that we can influence our level of well-being by creating environments more conductive to feelings of happiness , and by working with our genetic makeup.
Revised:  Lykken found that we can influence our level of well-being by creating environments more conductive to feelings of happiness and by working with our genetic makeup.
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Original:  Diener explains that the recipe for happiness for an individual always requires an interaction between genetics, environment and behaviours , so it is nonsensical to claim that an individual's happiness is due to only one ingredient.
Revised:  Diener explains that the recipe for happiness for an individual always requires genetics, environment and behaviours , so it is nonsensical to claim that an individual's happiness is due to only one ingredient.
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Original:  The "flow" In the 1970s , Csikszentmihalyi's started to study flow, a state of absorption where one's abilities are well-matched to the demands at-hand.
Revised:  The "flow" In the 1970s Csikszentmihalyi's started to study flow, a state of absorption where one's abilities are well-matched to the demands at-hand.
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Original:  The effect of challenging situations means that flow is often temporarily exciting and variously stressful, but this is considered eustress , which is also known as "good" stress.
Revised:  The effect of challenging situations means that flow is often temporarily exciting and variously stressful, but this is considered Eustress , which is also known as "good" stress.
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Original:  The activity becomes "autotelic" (an end in itself, done for its own sake) .
Revised:  The activity becomes "autotelic" (an end in itself, done for its own sake) 
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Original:  When happiness comes  so easily, it comes with a price one may not realize.
Revised:  When happiness comes to us so easily, it comes with a price one may not realize.
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Original:  When happiness comes  so easily, it comes with a price one may not realize.
Revised:  When happiness comes so easily, it comes with a price we may not realize.
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Original:  However, complete mental health is a combination of high emotional well-being, high psychological well-being,  high social well-being and low mental illness.
Revised:  However, complete mental health is a combination of high emotional well-being, high psychological well-being, and high social well-being and low mental illness.
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Original:  However, complete mental health is a combination of high emotional well-being, high psychological well-being,  high social well-being and low mental illness.
Revised:  However, complete mental health is a combination of high emotional well-being, high psychological well-being, high social well-being , along with low mental illness.
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Original:  More generally, movement is associated with the increase secretion of happiness-related chemicals such as dopamine, serotonin, endorphin, and endocannabinoid.
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Original:  In 2005 , a study conducted by Andrew Steptow and Michael Marmot at University College London  found that happiness is related to biological markers that play an important role in health.
Revised:  In 2005 a study conducted by Andrew Steptow and Michael Marmot at University College London found that happiness is related to biological markers that play an important role in health.
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Original:  In 2005 , a study conducted by Andrew Steptow and Michael Marmot at University College London  found that happiness is related to biological markers that play an important role in health.
Revised:  In 2005 , a study conducted by Andrew Steptow and Michael Marmot at University College London , found that happiness is related to biological markers that play an important role in health.
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Original:  Repeating their studies three years later , Steptow and Marmot found that participants who scored high in positive emotion continued to have lower levels of cortisol and fibrinogen, as well as a lower heart rate.
Revised:  Repeating their studies three years later Steptow and Marmot found that participants who scored high in positive emotion continued to have lower levels of cortisol and fibrinogen, as well as a lower heart rate.
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Original:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years , while Richard Davidson's bestseller  The Emotional Life of Your Brain (2012) argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
Revised:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years and Richard Davidson's bestseller The Emotional Life of Your Brain (2012) argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
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Original:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years , while Richard Davidson's bestseller  The Emotional Life of Your Brain (2012) argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
Revised:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years , while Richard Davidson's bestseller (2012) The Emotional Life of Your Brain (2012) argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
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Original:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years , while Richard Davidson's bestseller  The Emotional Life of Your Brain (2012) argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
Revised:  In Happy People Live Longer (2011), Bruno Frey reported that happy people live 14\% longer, increasing longevity 7.5 to 10 years , while Richard Davidson's bestseller The Emotional Life of Your Brain argues that positive emotion and happiness benefit long-term health.
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Original: Determining whether emotions have a genetic trait or not was studied by David Lykken and Auke Tellegen.
Revised: Whether emotions are genetically determined or not was studied by David Lykken and Auke Tellegen.
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Original:  They found that up to 80\% of a long-term sense of well-being is due to heredity.
Revised:  They found that up to 80\% of the variance in long-term sense of well-being is due to heredity.
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Original:  data and materials The forensic examination of important physical locations,
Revised:  data and materials Forensic examination of important physical locations,
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Original:  including the death/crime scene Family liaison The development of a victim profile Finding, interviewing and protecting witnesses International technical assistance Telecommunications and other digital evidence Financial issues The chronology of eventsThe Minnesota Protocol on the Investigation of Potentially Unlawful Death (2016), Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, (New York/Geneva, 2017) para.52
Revised:  including the death/crime scene Family liaison Development of a victim profile Finding, interviewing and protecting witnesses International technical assistance Telecommunications and other digital evidence Financial issues The chronology of eventsThe Minnesota Protocol on the Investigation of Potentially Unlawful Death (2016), Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, (New York/Geneva, 2017) para.52
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Original:  including the death/crime scene Family liaison The development of a victim profile Finding, interviewing and protecting witnesses International technical assistance Telecommunications and other digital evidence Financial issues The chronology of eventsThe Minnesota Protocol on the Investigation of Potentially Unlawful Death (2016), Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, (New York/Geneva, 2017) para.52
Revised:  including the death/crime scene Family liaison The development of a victim profile Finding, interviewing and protecting witnesses International technical assistance Telecommunications and other digital evidence Financial issues Chronology of eventsThe Minnesota Protocol on the Investigation of Potentially Unlawful Death (2016), Office of the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, (New York/Geneva, 2017) para.52
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Original:  ,ref> See Supreme Court of India, Criminal Appellate Jurisdiction, People’s Union for Civil Liberties & Anr. v. State of Maharashtra & Ors. (Criminal Appeal No. 1255 of 1999), 23 September 2014. </ref> The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) relied on the Principles and the Manual in its Study on customary international humanitarian law:
Revised:  See Supreme Court of India, Criminal Appellate Jurisdiction, People’s Union for Civil Liberties & Anr. v. State of Maharashtra & Ors. (Criminal Appeal No. 1255 of 1999), 23 September 2014. </ref> The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) relied on the Principles and the Manual in its Study on customary international humanitarian law:
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Original:  ,ref> See Supreme Court of India, Criminal Appellate Jurisdiction, People’s Union for Civil Liberties & Anr. v. State of Maharashtra & Ors. (Criminal Appeal No. 1255 of 1999), 23 September 2014. </ref> The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) relied on the Principles and the Manual in its Study on customary international humanitarian law:
Revised:  ,ref> See Supreme Court of India, Criminal Appellate Jurisdiction, People’s Union for Civil Liberties & Anr. v. State of Maharashtra & Ors. (Criminal Appeal No. 1255 of 1999), 23 September 2014. The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) relied on the Principles and the Manual in its Study on customary international humanitarian law:
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