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Original:  Hours after his death the deputy Prime Minister, Freundel Stewart, was sworn in as the island's new Prime minister .
Revised:  Hours after his death the deputy Prime Minister, Freundel Stewart, was sworn in as the island's new Prime Minister .
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Original:  The Prime Minister of Jamaica and the chair of CARICOM, Bruce Golding, has said that he is deeply saddened by the news and was quoted as saying, "The Caribbean has lost one of its youngest and most vibrant leaders who remained strong, determined and focussed to the very end." Golding also commended Thopmson for fighting "a brave fight to the very end demonstrating the unconditional love for his country and a commitment to the people of Barbados."
Revised:  The Prime Minister of Jamaica and the chair of CARICOM, Bruce Golding, has said that he is deeply saddened by the news and was quoted as saying, "The Caribbean has lost one of its youngest and most vibrant leaders who remained strong, determined and focused to the very end." Golding also commended Thopmson for fighting "a brave fight to the very end demonstrating the unconditional love for his country and a commitment to the people of Barbados."
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Original:  The Prime Minister of Jamaica and the chair of CARICOM, Bruce Golding, has said that he is deeply saddened by the news and was quoted as saying, "The Caribbean has lost one of its youngest and most vibrant leaders who remained strong, determined and focussed to the very end." Golding also commended Thopmson for fighting "a brave fight to the very end demonstrating the unconditional love for his country and a commitment to the people of Barbados."
Revised:  The Prime Minister of Jamaica and the chair of CARICOM, Bruce Golding, has said that he is deeply saddened by the news and was quoted as saying, "The Caribbean has lost one of its youngest and most vibrant leaders who remained strong, determined and focussed to the very end." Golding also commended Thompson for fighting "a brave fight to the very end demonstrating the unconditional love for his country and a commitment to the people of Barbados."
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Original:  However, Crippen told the coach that he was feeling ill eight kilometers (km) into the 10 km race.
Revised:  However, Crippen told the coach that he was feeling ill eight kilometers (km) into the ten km race.
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Original:  The Philidelphian, who comes from a line of prominent swimmers, was participating in the FINA Open Water 10-kilometer World Cup in Fujairah, Dubai.
Revised:  The Philidelphian, who comes from a line of prominent swimmers, was participating in the FINA Open Water ten kilometer World Cup in Fujairah, Dubai.
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Original: A map showing Dubai |140px A United States swimmer, Fran Crippen, drown during an open-water race today in the United Arab Erimates , the cause of the drowning is unknown.
Revised: A map showing Dubai |140px A United States swimmer, Fran Crippen, drown during an open-water race today in the United Arab Emirates , the cause of the drowning is unknown.
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Original: A map showing Dubai |140px A United States swimmer, Fran Crippen, drown during an open-water race today in the United Arab Emirates, the cause of the drowning is unknown.
Revised: A map showing Dubai |140px A United States swimmer, Fran Crippen, drowned during an open-water race today in the United Arab Emirates, the cause of the drowning is unknown.
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Original: A map showing Dubai |140px A United States swimmer, Fran Crippen, drowned during an open-water race today in the United Arab Emirates , the cause of the drowning is unknown.
Revised: A map showing Dubai |140px A United States swimmer, Fran Crippen, drowned during an open-water race today in the United Arab Emirates . The cause of the drowning is unknown.
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Original: The Philidelphian, who comes from a line of prominent swimmers, was participating in the FINA Open Water ten kilometer World Cup in Fujairah, Dubai .
Revised: The Philidelphian, who comes from a line of prominent swimmers, was participating in the FINA Open Water ten kilometer World Cup in Fujairah, United Arab Emirates .
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Original:  However, Crippen told the coach that he was feeling ill eight kilometers (km) into the ten km race.
Revised:  However, Crippen told his coach that he was feeling ill eight kilometers (km) into the ten km race.
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Original:  However, Maglione said from Mexico where he was attending Olympic meetings  "He continued and he was found in the deep of the water." Maglione disclosed that this was the first death in a FINA event and that they had launched an investigation into the death.
Revised:  Speaking from Mexico, where he was attending Olympic meetings "He continued and he was found in the deep of the water." Maglione disclosed that this was the first death in a FINA event and that they had launched an investigation into the death.
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Original:  They also advised that life threatening flash floods and landslides are possible, especially in mountainous areas in the storms path.
Revised:  They also advised that life threatening flash floods and landslides are possible, especially in mountainous areas in the storm's path.
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Original:  Some computer module forecasts have Richard affecting Gulf of Mexico oil and natural gas rigs  
Revised:  Some computer module forecasts have Richard affecting Gulf of Mexico oil and natural gas rigs . 
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Original:  Some computer module forecasts have Richard affecting Gulf of Mexico oil and natural gas rigs . Related storie
Revised:  Some computer module forecasts have Richard affecting Gulf of Mexico oil and natural gas rigs Related storie
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Original:  Some computer module forecasts have Richard affecting Gulf of Mexico oil and natural gas rigs . Related storie
Revised:  Some computer module forecasts have Richard affecting Gulf of Mexico oil and natural gas rigs . 
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Original:  Honduras and Belize are currently under a hurricane warning and the Mexican government has begun to evacuate fishermen from the Yucatan Peninsula, which is under a tropical storm warning, as strong winds and rain are expected over the next 24 hours.
Revised:  Honduras and Belize are currently under a hurricane warning and the Mexican government has begun to evacuate fishermen from the Yucatán Peninsula, which is under a tropical storm warning, as strong winds and rain are expected over the next 24 hours.
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Original:  Richard is likely to plow through Belize and the Yucatan Peninsula before emerging into the Bay of Campeche as a tropical depression on Tuesday according to the Miami based National Hurricane Center.
Revised:  Richard is likely to plow through Belize and the Yucatán Peninsula before emerging into the Bay of Campeche as a tropical depression on Tuesday according to the Miami based National Hurricane Center.
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Original:  A Honduran emergency response official, Randolfo Funez said, "[We will] evacuate between 3,000 and 4,000 people that live in coastal zones where there could be a storm surge and heavy winds . "  The National Hurricane Center (NHC) said, "A storm surge will raise water levels by as much as 2 to 4 feet above normal tide levels along the northern coast of Honduras and Belize...and 1 to 3 feet in the bay islands.
Revised:  "[We will] evacuate between 3,000 and 4,000 people that live in coastal zones where there could be a storm surge and heavy winds . " The National Hurricane Center (NHC) said, "A storm surge will raise water levels by as much as 2 to 4 feet above normal tide levels along the northern coast of Honduras and Belize...and 1 to 3 feet in the bay islands.
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Original:  A Honduran emergency response official, Randolfo Funez said, "[We will] evacuate between 3,000 and 4,000 people that live in coastal zones where there could be a storm surge and heavy winds . "  The National Hurricane Center (NHC) said, "A storm surge will raise water levels by as much as 2 to 4 feet above normal tide levels along the northern coast of Honduras and Belize...and 1 to 3 feet in the bay islands.
Revised:  A Honduran emergency response official, Randolfo Funez said, "[We will] evacuate between 3,000 and 4,000 people that live in coastal zones where there could be a storm surge and heavy winds , " The National Hurricane Center (NHC) said, "A storm surge will raise water levels by as much as 2 to 4 feet above normal tide levels along the northern coast of Honduras and Belize...and 1 to 3 feet in the bay islands.
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Original:  A Honduran emergency response official, Randolfo Funez said, "[We will] evacuate between 3,000 and 4,000 people that live in coastal zones where there could be a storm surge and heavy winds . "  The National Hurricane Center (NHC) said, "A storm surge will raise water levels by as much as 2 to 4 feet above normal tide levels along the northern coast of Honduras and Belize...and 1 to 3 feet in the bay islands.
Revised:  A Honduran emergency response official, Randolfo Funez said, "[We will] evacuate between 3,000 and 4,000 people that live in coastal zones where there could be a storm surge and heavy winds . " a Honduran emergency response official, Randolfo Funez, said. The National Hurricane Center (NHC) said, "A storm surge will raise water levels by as much as 2 to 4 feet above normal tide levels along the northern coast of Honduras and Belize...and 1 to 3 feet in the bay islands.
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Original:   As Typhoon Megi reached China, the rain swept in Yeongam on Sunday afternoon and the race was red-flagged for about half an hour, after that conditions improved.
Revised:  As Typhoon Megi reached China, heavy rain hit Yeongam on Sunday afternoon and the race was red-flagged for about half an hour, after that conditions improved.
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Original:   As Typhoon Megi reached China, the rain swept in Yeongam on Sunday afternoon and the race was red-flagged for about half an hour, after that conditions improved.
Revised:  As Typhoon Megi reached China, the rain swept in Yeongam on Sunday afternoon and the race was red-flagged for about half an hour, before conditions improved.
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Original:  Both Red Bull drivers failed to finish despite starting 1-2 from the grid before and after race restarted.
Revised:  Both Red Bull drivers failed to finish despite starting first and second from the grid before and after race restarted.
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Original:  Mark Webber ran wide and hit the wallcollecting Nico Rosberg's Mercedes  and Sebastian Vettel’s engine blew up during his spurt to the finish line leading the race.
Revised:  Webber ran wide and hit the wallcollecting Nico Rosberg's Mercedes and Sebastian Vettel’s engine blew up during his spurt to the finish line leading the race.
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Original:  Mark Webber ran wide and hit the wallcollecting Nico Rosberg's Mercedes  and Sebastian Vettel’s engine blew up during his spurt to the finish line leading the race.
Revised:  Mark Webber ran wide and hit a wall, hitting Nico Rosberg's Mercedes and Sebastian Vettel’s engine blew up during his spurt to the finish line leading the race.
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Original:  Mark Webber ran wide and hit the wallcollecting Nico Rosberg's Mercedes  and Sebastian Vettel’s engine blew up during his spurt to the finish line leading the race.
Revised:  Mark Webber ran wide and hit the wallcollecting Nico Rosberg's Mercedes , and Sebastian Vettel’s engine blew up during his spurt to the finish line leading the race.
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Original:  [[File:Fernando Alonso 2010 Japan 3rd qualify.jpg|Fernando Alonso driving at the previous GP ]] Lewis Hamilton changed places twice with Alonso behind Vettel, but finished second for McLaren.
Revised:  [[File:Fernando Alonso 2010 Japan 3rd qualify.jpg|Fernando Alonso driving at the previous GP ]] Hamilton changed places twice with Alonso behind Vettel, but finished second for McLaren.
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Original:  Alonso's teammamte Felipe Massa closing the podium on third place Michael Schumacher drove his best race in this season for Mercedes overtaking Robert Kubica's Renault since the race restarted after red flag.
Revised:  Alonso's teammamte Felipe Massa closing the podium on third place Michael Schumacher drove his best race in this season for Mercedes overtaking Robert Kubica's Renault after the restart following the red flag.
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Original:  The finished 4-5th . Vitantonio Liuzzi placed his Force India on 6th place after his teammate Sutil was off the track and the race on lap 47 in a contact with Kamui Kobayashi's Sauber.
Revised:  The finished 4-5th . Vitantonio Liuzzi placed his Force India on 6th place after his teammate , Adran Sutil, crashed in lap 47 in a contact with Kamui Kobayashi's Sauber.
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Original:  The finished 4-5th . Vitantonio Liuzzi placed his Force India on 6th place after his teammate Sutil was off the track and the race on lap 47 in a contact with Kamui Kobayashi's Sauber.
Revised:  The finished 4-5th . Vitantonio Liuzzi placed his Force India on 6th place after his teammate Sutil was off the track and the race on lap 47 after coming into contact with Kamui Kobayashi's Sauber.
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Original:  The two German drivers of Sauber and Williams - Nick Heidfeld and Nico Hülkenberg closed the top ten.
Revised:  The two German drivers of Sauber and Williams — Nick Heidfeld and Nico Hülkenberg closed the top ten.
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Original:  The situation in this seasonstandings now changed in favour of Alonso - the Spaniard owns 231 points, passes Webber for 11  points.
Revised:  The situation in the season's standings has now changed in favour of Alonso - the Spaniard owns 231 points, passes Webber for 11 points.
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Original:  The situation in this seasonstandings now changed in favour of Alonso - the Spaniard owns 231 points, passes Webber for 11  points.
Revised:  The situation in this seasonstandings now changed in favour of Alonso —the Spaniard leads the driver's championship with 231 points, passes Webber for 11 points.
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Original:  The situation in this seasonstandings now changed in favour of Alonso - the Spaniard owns 231 points, passes Webber for 11  points.
Revised:  The situation in this seasonstandings now changed in favour of Alonso - the Spaniard owns 231 points, 11 points.
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Original:  Constructors' standings is still dominated by Red Bull with 426 points, McLaren 27 and Ferrari 52 points behind
Revised:  Constructors' standings is still dominated by Red Bull , who have 426 points, McLaren 27 and Ferrari 52 points behind
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Original:  Alonso's teammamte Felipe Massa closing the podium on third place  Michael Schumacher drove his best race in this season for Mercedes overtaking Robert Kubica's Renault after the restart following the red flag.
Revised:  Alonso's teammamte Felipe Massa closing the podium on third place . Michael Schumacher drove his best race in this season for Mercedes overtaking Robert Kubica's Renault after the restart following the red flag.
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Original: ]] The Group of 20 (G20) of the world's leading developed and developing countries' finance ministers agreed  Saturday to pursue a plan that would avoid dangerous currency devaluations and would also would attempt to reduce trade imbalances.
Revised: ]] The Group of 20 (G20) of the world's leading developed and developing countries' finance ministers agreed on Saturday to pursue a plan that would avoid dangerous currency devaluations and would also would attempt to reduce trade imbalances.
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Original:  We are all committed to play our part in achieving strong, sustainable and balanced growth in a collaborative and coordinated way,"  the G20 statement said.
Revised:  We are all committed to play our part in achieving strong, sustainable and balanced growth in a collaborative and coordinated way," the G20 said.
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Original:  On the topic of trade imbalances, the statement stated that "excessive imbalances" would be "assessed against indicative guidelines to be agreed."
Revised:  On the topic of trade imbalances, the G-20 stated that "excessive imbalances" would be "assessed against indicative guidelines to be agreed."
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Original:   "There are many perspectives on the current account issue.
Revised:  He added: "There are many perspectives on the current account issue.
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Original:  So we need to study this carefully , " Noda said.
Revised:  So we need to study this carefully . " Noda said.
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Original:  So we need to study this carefully , " Noda said.
Revised:  So we need to study this carefully , " 
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Original:  The G20's heads of state will meet in Seoul, South Korea  next month
Revised:  The G20's heads of state will meet in Seoul, South Korea , next month
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Original: ]] The Group of 20 (G20) of the world's leading developed and developing countries' finance ministers agreed on Saturday to pursue a plan that would avoid dangerous currency devaluations and would also would attempt to reduce trade imbalances.
Revised: ]] The Group of 20 (G20) agreed on Saturday to pursue a plan that would avoid dangerous currency devaluations and would also would attempt to reduce trade imbalances.
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Original: ]] The Group of 20 (G20) of the world's leading developed and developing countries' finance ministers agreed on Saturday to pursue a plan that would avoid dangerous currency devaluations and would also would attempt to reduce trade imbalances.
Revised: ]] The Group of 20 (G20) and the main developing countries' finance ministers agreed on Saturday to pursue a plan that would avoid dangerous currency devaluations and would also would attempt to reduce trade imbalances.
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Original: ]] The Group of 20 (G20) and the main developing countries' finance ministers agreed on Saturday to pursue a plan that would avoid dangerous currency devaluations and would also would attempt to reduce trade imbalances.
Revised: ]] The Group of 20 (G20) of the world's leading developed and developing countries' finance ministers agreed on Saturday to pursue a plan that would avoid dangerous currency devaluations and would also would attempt to reduce trade imbalances.
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Original: Today the investigators involved in the Germanwings crash in March this year have now formally identified the 150 passengers who perished on the Airbus 320 when it was flown into the French Alps.
Revised: Today the investigators looking into the crash in March this year have now formally identified the 150 passengers who perished on the Airbus 320 when it was flown into the French Alps.
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Original: Today the investigators involved in the Germanwings crash in March this year have now formally identified the 150 passengers who perished on the Airbus 320 when it was flown into the French Alps.
Revised: Today the investigators involved in the Germanwings crash in March have now formally identified the 150 passengers who perished on the Airbus 320 when it was flown into the French Alps.
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Original: Today the investigators involved in the Germanwings crash in March this year have now formally identified the 150 passengers who perished on the Airbus 320 when it was flown into the French Alps.
Revised: Today the investigators involved in the Germanwings crash in March this year have now formally identified the 150 passengers who died on the when it was flown into the French Alps.
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Original:  Reports from France's BEA civil aviation investigators revealed that Lubitz had practised altering the flight's data settings during the outbound flight to Barcelona from an altitude of 11,600 metres to an alarmingly low 30 metres.
Revised:  Reports from France's BEA civil aviation investigators revealed that Lubitz had practised altering the flight's data settings during the outbound flight to from an altitude of 11,600 metres to an alarmingly low 30 metres.
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Original:  This has sparked a call for other international flights to implement the rule of always having two people in the cockpit at all times during flights to prevent any further tragedies such as this.
Revised:  The incident has sparked calls for other international flights to implement the rule of always having two people in the cockpit at all times during flights to prevent any further tragedies such as this.
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Original: Today the investigators looking into the crash in March have now formally identified the 150 passengers who died on the when it was flown into the French Alps.
Revised: Investigators looking into the crash in March have now formally identified the 150 passengers who died on the when it was flown into the French Alps.
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Original:  It has been projected that News Corp spent too much in bringing IGN into the fold, with the deal including paying off the latter's $ 50 million debt, as well as the company never having been overly profitable.
Revised:  It has been projected that News Corp spent too much in bringing IGN into the fold, with the deal including paying off the latter's $ 50 million debt, since IGN has never been very profitable.
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Original:  However, IGN revenue has sharply increased over the past year, and  may be a profitable addition once integrated with the rest of News Corp's  online holdings
Revised:  However, IGN revenue has sharply increased over the past year, and it may be a profitable addition once integrated with the rest of News Corp's online holdings
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Original:  However, IGN revenue has sharply increased over the past year, and  may be a profitable addition once integrated with the rest of News Corp's  online holdings
Revised:  However, IGN revenue has sharply increased over the past year, and may be a profitable addition once integrated with News Corp's online holdings
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Original: US-based News Corporation (formerly based in Australia) has announced its purchase of IGN Entertainment, an Australian-based online media group, for US$650 million.
Revised: US-based News Corporation (formerly based in Australia) has announced its purchase of IGN Entertainment, an US-based online media group, for US$650 million.
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Original: US-based News Corporation (formerly based in Australia) has announced its purchase of IGN Entertainment, an US-based online media group, for US$650 million.
Revised: US-based News Corporation (formerly based in Australia) has announced its purchase of IGN Entertainment, a US-based online media group, for US$650 million.
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Original:  Sections of the north coast of Honduras, from Limón westward to Puerto Cortes and the Bay Islands including Rotan, Utila and Guanaja, as well as the whole of Belize are still under a hurricane warning according to the Hurricane Center.
Revised:  Sections of the north coast of Honduras, from Limón westward to Puerto Cortes and the Bay Islands including Rotan, Utila and Guanaja, as well as the entire country of Belize are still under a hurricane warning according to the Hurricane Center.
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Original:  The depression could pose a threat to oil rigs in the Bay of Campeche  
Revised:  The depression could pose a threat to oil rigs in the Bay of Campeche . 
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Original: A wind swath of Richard showing watches and warnings Richard has become a Category one hurricane with winds of 85 mph (155 kph) according to the Miami-based National Hurricane Center .
Revised: A wind swath of Richard showing watches and warnings has become a Category one hurricane with winds of 85 mph (155 kph) according to the Miami-based National Hurricane Center .
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