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Original:  From his marriage to Marjorie Agnes Nambiar in London ( 1953 ) he had a daughter and a son.
Revised:  From his marriage to Marjorie Agnes Nambiar in London ( 1953 , he had a daughter and a son.
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Original:  While living in Bombay, he met and married Saroja Kamakshi, mother of celebrated Indian classical dancer, Malavika Sarukkai.
Revised:  While living in Bombay, he met and married Saroja Kamakshi, mother of Indian classical dancer, Malavika Sarukkai.
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Original:  They have one son.
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Original:  Legacy Park Centre, the administration office of Technopark As the Secretary, Department of Electronics of  Government of India 1986–89, Nambiar was successful initiating and implementing several new policy initiatives in Research and Development , specifically manufacturing and application of electronics throughout the country.
Revised:  Legacy Park Centre, the administration office of Technopark As the Secretary, Department of Electronics of the Government of India 1986–89, Nambiar was successful initiating and implementing several new policy initiatives in Research and Development , specifically manufacturing and application of electronics throughout the country.
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Original:  Legacy Park Centre, the administration office of Technopark As the Secretary, Department of Electronics of  Government of India 1986–89, Nambiar was successful initiating and implementing several new policy initiatives in Research and Development , specifically manufacturing and application of electronics throughout the country.
Revised:  Legacy Park Centre, the administration office of Technopark As the Secretary, Department of Electronics of Government of India 1986–89, Nambiar was successful initiating and implementing several new policy initiatives in research and development , specifically manufacturing and application of electronics throughout the country.
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Original:  He played a major role in developing the Indian Electronics Industry including the establishment of C-DAC, STPI, CEDTI and VLSI laboratories.
Revised:  He played a major role in developing the Indian electronics industry including the establishment of C-DAC, STPI, CEDTI and VLSI laboratories.
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Original:  During his stint (1989 to 1991) as the Special Advisor to the Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar set up India's first Electronic Technology Park (Techno Park) in Trivandrum to provide infrastractural support required to set up high technology electronic units in the State .
Revised:  During his stint (1989 to the Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar set up India's first Electronic Technology Park (Techno Park) in Trivandrum to provide infrastractural support required to set up high technology electronic units in the State .
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Original:  During his stint (1989 to 1991) as the Special Advisor to the Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar set up India's first Electronic Technology Park (Techno Park) in Trivandrum to provide infrastractural support required to set up high technology electronic units in the State .
Revised:  During his stint (1989 to 1991) as the Special Advisor to the Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar set up India's first electronic technology park in Trivandrum to provide infrastractural support required to set up high technology electronic units in the State .
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Original:  During his stint (1989 to 1991) as the Special Advisor to the Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar set up India's first Electronic Technology Park (Techno Park) in Trivandrum to provide infrastractural support required to set up high technology electronic units in the State .
Revised:  During his stint (1989 to 1991) as the Special Advisor to the Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar set up India's first Electronic Technology Park (Techno Park) in Trivandrum to provide infrastracture support required to set up high technology electronic units in the State .
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Original:  During his stint (1989 to 1991) as the Special Advisor to the Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar set up India's first Electronic Technology Park (Techno Park) in Trivandrum to provide infrastractural support required to set up high technology electronic units in the State .
Revised:  During his stint (1989 to 1991) as the Special Advisor to the Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar set up India's first Electronic Technology Park (Techno Park) in Trivandrum to provide infrastractural support required to set up high technology electronic units in the state .
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Original:  He also set up a chain of Electronic Industries in different parts of Kerala from Trivandrum to Kannur in the major areas of electronic components, industrial electronics, consumer electronics and telecommunication between 1973 and 1984.
Revised:  He also set up a chain of electronic industries in different parts of Kerala from Trivandrum to Kannur in the major areas of electronic components, industrial electronics, consumer electronics and telecommunication between 1973 and 1984.
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Original:  Nambiar is credited with evolving a new concept of consortium of ancillary industries by mobilising all the 41 ancillary industries of Indian Telephone Industries in Bangalore to form a consortium company to manufacture plan 103 telephone instruments with a turnover of more than INR 200 million.
Revised:  Nambiar is credited with evolving a new concept of consortium of ancillary industries by mobilising all the 41 ancillary industries of Indian Telephone Industries in Bangalore to form a consortium to manufacture plan 103 telephone instruments with a turnover of more than INR 200 million.
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Original:  As the Founder Chairman of Keltron, Nambiar was instrumental in taking electronics to the villages by setting up 50 women's co-operatives that produced most of the consumer products sold by Keltron .
Revised:  As the founder chairman of Keltron, Nambiar was instrumental in taking electronics to the villages by setting up 50 women's co-operatives that produced most of the consumer products sold by Keltron .
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Original:  As the Founder Chairman of Keltron, Nambiar was instrumental in taking electronics to the villages by setting up 50 women's co-operatives that produced most of the consumer products sold by Keltron .
Revised:  As the Founder Chairman of Keltron, Nambiar was instrumental in taking electronics to the villages by setting up 50 women's co-operatives that produced most of the company's consumer products .
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Original:  He introduced for the first time in India the concept of village women’s co-operative for manufacture of electronic assembly oriented products  thereby taking industries to the villages of Kerala.
Revised:  He introduced the concept of village women’s co-operative for manufacture of electronic assembly oriented products thereby taking industries to the villages of Kerala.
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Original:  He introduced for the first time in India the concept of village women’s co-operative for manufacture of electronic assembly oriented products  thereby taking industries to the villages of Kerala.
Revised:  He introduced for the first time in India the concept of village women’s co-operatives for manufacture of electronic assembly oriented products thereby taking industries to the villages of Kerala.
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Original:  He introduced for the first time in India the concept of village women’s co-operative for manufacture of electronic assembly oriented products  thereby taking industries to the villages of Kerala.
Revised:  He introduced for the first time in India the concept of village women’s co-operative for manufacture of electronic assembly oriented products , thereby taking industries to the villages of Kerala.
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Original:  The concept of women’s co-operatives in villages was emulated by various State Governments like Punjab, Bihar, Manipur, Pondicheery and Uttar Pradesh.
Revised:  The concept of women’s co-operatives in villages was emulated by various state governments like Punjab, Bihar, Manipur, Pondicheery and Uttar Pradesh.
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Original:  Keltron also trained a number of unskilled workers into skilled electronic equipment assembly operators  enabling them to work in women's co-operatives in Ranchi, Pondicherry and Imphal and Lakshadeep.
Revised:  Keltron also trained unskilled workers into skilled electronic equipment assembly operators enabling them to work in women's co-operatives in Ranchi, Pondicherry and Imphal and Lakshadeep.
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Original:  Keltron also trained a number of unskilled workers into skilled electronic equipment assembly operators  enabling them to work in women's co-operatives in Ranchi, Pondicherry and Imphal and Lakshadeep.
Revised:  Keltron also trained a number of unskilled workers into skilled electronic equipment assembly operators , enabling them to work in women's co-operatives in Ranchi, Pondicherry and Imphal and Lakshadeep.
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Original:  Keltron also trained a number of unskilled workers into skilled electronic equipment assembly operators  enabling them to work in women's co-operatives in Ranchi, Pondicherry and Imphal and Lakshadeep.
Revised:  Keltron also trained a number of unskilled workers into skilled electronic equipment assembly operators enabling them to work in women's co-operatives in Ranchi, Pondicherry , Imphal, and Lakshadeep.
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Original:  He also developed the R D Center for Keltron, the Electronics Research Development Center, which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has now been brought under C-DAC.
Revised:  He also developed the D Center for Keltron, the Electronics Research Development Center, which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has now been brought under C-DAC.
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Original:  He also developed the R D Center for Keltron, the Electronics Research Development Center, which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has now been brought under C-DAC.
Revised:  He also developed the R research and development center for Keltron, the Electronics Research Development Center, which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has now been brought under C-DAC.
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Original:  He also developed the R D Center for Keltron, the Electronics Research Development Center, which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has now been brought under C-DAC.
Revised:  He also developed the R D Center for Keltron, Development Center, which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has now been brought under C-DAC.
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Original:  He also developed the R D Center for Keltron, the Electronics Research Development Center, which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has now been brought under C-DAC.
Revised:  He also developed the R D Center for Keltron, the Electronics Research which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has now been brought under C-DAC.
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Original:  He also developed the R D Center for Keltron, the Electronics Research Development Center, which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has now been brought under C-DAC.
Revised:  He also developed the R D Center for Keltron, the Electronics Research Development Center, which was later taken over by the Department of Electronics and has since been brought under C-DAC.
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Original:  KELTRON, was the first autonomous Corporation in the State sector in India, an example later emulated by several state Governments in the country.
Revised:  Keltron was the first autonomous Corporation in the State sector in India, an example later emulated by several state Governments in the country.
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Original:  KELTRON, was the first autonomous Corporation in the State sector in India, an example later emulated by several state Governments in the country.
Revised:  KELTRON, was the first autonomous corporation in the state sector in India, an example later emulated by several state Governments in the country.
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Original:  KELTRON, was the first autonomous Corporation in the State sector in India, an example later emulated by several state Governments in the country.
Revised:  KELTRON, was the first autonomous Corporation in the State sector in India, an example later emulated by several state governments in the country.
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Original:  During his stint as the Honorary Special Advisor to Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the Chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts , Kerala and Tata Ceramics (Kerala) Limited .
Revised:  During his stint as the honorary special advisor to the Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the Chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts , Kerala and Tata Ceramics (Kerala) Limited .
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Original:  During his stint as the Honorary Special Advisor to Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the Chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts , Kerala and Tata Ceramics (Kerala) Limited .
Revised:  During his stint as the Honorary Special Advisor to Government of Kerala on industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the Chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts , Kerala and Tata Ceramics (Kerala) Limited .
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Original:  During his stint as the Honorary Special Advisor to Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the Chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts , Kerala and Tata Ceramics (Kerala) Limited .
Revised:  During his stint as the Honorary Special Advisor to Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts , Kerala and Tata Ceramics (Kerala) Limited .
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Original:  During his stint as the Honorary Special Advisor to Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the Chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts , Kerala and Tata Ceramics (Kerala) Limited .
Revised:  During his stint as the Honorary Special Advisor to Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the Chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts and Tata Ceramics (Kerala) Limited .
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Original:  During his stint as the Honorary Special Advisor to Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the Chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts , Kerala and Tata Ceramics (Kerala) Limited .
Revised:  During his stint as the Honorary Special Advisor to Government of Kerala on Industries , Nambiar influenced Ratan Tata, the Chairman of Tata Industries, to invest in Kerala, resulting in the formation of Taj Hotels and Resorts , Kerala and Tata Ceramics .
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Original:  He received a Padma Bhushan in 2006 for all of his contributions to the field of Science and Engineering in India.
Revised:  He received a Padma Bhushan in 2006 for all of his contributions to the fields of science and engineering in India.
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Original:  1995 Distinguished Fellow of the Institution of Electronics and Telecommunication Engineers – 1986 VASVIK Industrial Research Award – 1986 National Design Award by the Institution of Engineers – 1985 Science & Technology Award by Kerala Government – 1978 Republic Day Award by the Invention Promotion Board of CSIR – 1973 Institution of Telecommunication Engineers Award – 1963 London County Council Major Award for the post graduate studies – 1955
Revised:  1995 Distinguished Fellow of the Institution of Electronics and Telecommunication Engineers – 1986 VASVIK Industrial Research Award – 1986 National Design Award by the Institution of Engineers – 1985 Science & Technology Award by Kerala Government – 1978 Republic Day Award by the Invention Promotion Board of the Council of Scientific and Industrial Research – 1973 Institution of Telecommunication Engineers Award – 1963 London County Council Major Award for the post graduate studies – 1955
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Original: During his stint as the special advisor to the Government of Kerala on industries from 1989 to 1991, Nambiar set up India's first electronic technology park in Trivandrum to provide infrastracture support required to set up high technology electronic units in the state.
Revised: During his stint as the special advisor to the Government of Kerala on industries from 1989 to 1991, Nambiar set up India's first electronic technology park in Trivandrum to provide infrastructure support required to set up high technology electronic units in the state.
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Original:  In    1985, Indira Gandhi appointed Nambiar as the chairman and managing director of Indian Telephone Industries Limited, the largest public sector company in telecommunications.
Revised:  In In 1985, Indira Gandhi appointed Nambiar as the chairman and managing director of Indian Telephone Industries Limited, the largest public sector company in telecommunications.
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Original:  The Kerala government, in 1989, appointed him as qn honorary special advisor.
Revised:  The Kerala government, in 1989, appointed him as an honorary special advisor.
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Original:  In February 1995, Nambiar  launched an INR 15 billion project to generate 513 megawatts of power under the name of Kannur Power Projects in his native Panchayat of Kalliasseri in the Kannur District in North Kerala.
Revised:  In February 1995, Nambiar launched an INR 15 billion project to generate 513 megawatts of electricity under the name of Kannur Power Projects in his native Panchayat of Kalliasseri in the Kannur District in North Kerala.
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Original:  In February 1995, Nambiar  launched an INR 15 billion project to generate 513 megawatts of power under the name of Kannur Power Projects in his native Panchayat of Kalliasseri in the Kannur District in North Kerala.
Revised:  In February 1995, Nambiar launched an INR 15 billion project to generate 513 megawatts of power under the name of Kannur Power Projects in his native Panchayat of Kalliasseri in the Kannur District in Kerala.
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Original:  Personal life Nambiar was born in Kalliassery, Kannur in what is now North Kerala to P. P. Chindan Nambiar and K. P. Madhavi.
Revised:  Personal life Nambiar was born in Kalliasseri, Kannur district in what is now North Kerala to P. P. Chindan Nambiar and K. P. Madhavi.
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Original:  During this stint the Centre for Development of Advanced Computing was formed with Pune as it's headquarters merging his earlier initatives such as ER&DC, Trivandrum to it.
Revised:  During this stint the Centre for Development of Advanced Computing was formed with Pune as it's headquarters merging his earlier initiatives such as ER&DC, Trivandrum to it.
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Original:  In February 1995, Nambiar under the aegis of KPP Nambiar Associates and it's Mauritius based subsidary Kortech Corporation (with a 24\% stake) launched an INR 1471 Crore Naphtha based power project to generate 513 megawatts of electricity under the name of Kannur Power Projects in his native Panchayat of Kalliasseri in the Kannur District in Kerala.
Revised:  In February 1995, Nambiar under the aegis of KPP Nambiar Associates and it's Mauritius based subsidiary Kortech Corporation (with a 24\% stake) launched an INR 1471 Crore Naphtha based power project to generate 513 megawatts of electricity under the name of Kannur Power Projects in his native Panchayat of Kalliasseri in the Kannur District in Kerala.
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Original:  The declaration is publicized by an IHR Emergency Committee (EC) of international experts, which was developed following the SARS outbreak in 2002– 03.
Revised:  The declaration is publicized by an IHR Emergency Committee (EC) of international experts, which was developed following the 2002– 03.
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Original:  In October 2019, continuing cases of wild polio in Pakistan and Afghanistan, in addition to new vaccine-derived cases in Africa and Asia, was reviewed and remains a PHEIC.
Revised:  In October 2019, continuing cases of wild polio in Pakistan and Afghanistan, in addition to new vaccine-derived cases in Africa and Asia, was reviewed and wild polio continued to be a PHEIC.
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Original:  In October 2019, continuing cases of wild polio in Pakistan and Afghanistan, in addition to new vaccine-derived cases in Africa and Asia, was reviewed and wild polio continued to be a PHEIC.
Revised:  In October 2019, continuing cases of wild polio in Pakistan and Afghanistan, in addition to new vaccine-derived cases in Africa and Asia, was reviewed and polio continued to be a PHEIC.
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Original:  The 26th meeting was held in October 2020.
Revised:  The 28th meeting was held in October 2020.
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Original: Johannes Servaas Germishuys, commonly known as Gerrie Germishuys (born 29 October 1949  Natal (now KwaZulu-Natal)  is a former South African rugby union player , who played for South African Springboks.
Revised: Johannes Servaas Germishuys, commonly known as Gerrie Germishuys (born 29 October 1949 Natal (now KwaZulu-Natal) ) is a former South African rugby union player , who played for South African Springboks.
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Original:  He began his international rugby debut  on 22 June 1974 for the South African Springboks against Lions.
Revised:  His international rugby debut on 22 June 1974 for the South African Springboks against Lions.
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Original:  He began his international rugby debut  on 22 June 1974 for the South African Springboks against Lions.
Revised:  He began his international rugby debut was on 22 June 1974 for the South African Springboks against Lions.
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Original:  He  played against the "All Blacks" in 1976 , the Lions in 1980.
Revised:  He also played against the "All Blacks" in 1976 , the Lions in 1980.
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Original:  He  played against the "All Blacks" in 1976 , the Lions in 1980.
Revised:  He played against the "All Blacks" in 1976 and the Lions in 1980.
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Original: No. Opposition Result (SA 1st) Position Tries Date Venue 1. Lions 9–28 Wing 22 June 1974 Loftus Versveld, Pretoria 2.
Revised: No. Opposition Result (SA 1st) Position Tries Date Venue 1. 9–28 Wing 22 June 1974 Loftus Versveld, Pretoria 2.
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Original:  New Zealand 16–7 Wing 1 24 July 1976 Kings Park Stadium, Durban 3.
Revised:  16–7 Wing 1 24 July 1976 Kings Park Stadium, Durban 3.
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Original:  World XV 45–24 Wing 1 27 August 1977 Loftus Versfeld, Pretoria 7.  South American Jaguars 24–9 Wing 1 26 April 1980 Wanderers Stadium, Johannesburg 8. South America Jaguars 18–9 Wing 3 May 1980 Kings Park Stadium, Durban 9. British and Irish Lions 26–22 Wing 1 31 May 1980 Newlands, Cape Town 10.
Revised:  World XV 45–24 Wing 1 27 August 1977 Loftus Versfeld, Pretoria 7. South American Jaguars 24–9 Wing 1 26 April 1980 Wanderers Stadium, Johannesburg 8. South America Jaguars 18–9 Wing 3 May 1980 Kings Park Stadium, Durban 9. British Lions 26–22 Wing 1 31 May 1980 Newlands, Cape Town 10.
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Original:  British and Irish Lions 26–19 Wing 1 14 June 1980 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein 11.
Revised:  British Lions 26–19 Wing 1 14 June 1980 Free State Stadium, Bloemfontein 11.
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