wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Post-war 200px|The sign on the wall of Seaman's Church in Ashdod regarding Per Faye-Hansen After the war, Faye-Hansen founded the Scandinavian Seaman's Church in Haifa and in 1969  in Ashdod following the establishment of the port.
Revised: Post-war 200px|The sign on the wall of Seaman's Church in Ashdod regarding Per Faye-Hansen After the war, Faye-Hansen founded the Scandinavian Seaman's Church in Haifa and in 1969 he did the same in Ashdod following the establishment of the port.
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Original:  Three typical examples of privacy-invasive software are adware, spyware and content hijacking programs.
Revised:  Three typical examples of privacy-invasive software are adware, spyware and session hijacking programs.
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Original:  Three typical examples of privacy-invasive software are adware, spyware and session hijacking programs.
Revised:  Three typical examples of privacy-invasive software are adware, spyware and browser hijacking programs.
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Original:  Today, software-based privacy-invasions occur in numerous aspects of Internet usage.
Revised: Spyware and identity theft are two related topics in that individuals could use spyware to change the identity of a victim or spy on a potential victim. Spyware allows the aggressor and hacker to extract the victim's personal information and behaviors, thus making it easier for him or her to steal the identity of a victim. Today, software-based privacy-invasions occur in numerous aspects of Internet usage.
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Original: Definition  ]  In addition to the direct negative consequences, we also introduce indirect negative consequences  . By doing so our classification distinguishes between any negative behaviour a program has been designed to carry out (direct negative consequences) and security threats introduced by just having that software executing on the system (indirect negative consequences).
Revised: Definition s] In addition to the direct negative consequences, we also introduce indirect negative consequences . By doing so our classification distinguishes between any negative behaviour a program has been designed to carry out (direct negative consequences) and security threats introduced by just having that software executing on the system (indirect negative consequences).
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Original: Definition  ]  In addition to the direct negative consequences, we also introduce indirect negative consequences  . By doing so our classification distinguishes between any negative behaviour a program has been designed to carry out (direct negative consequences) and security threats introduced by just having that software executing on the system (indirect negative consequences).
Revised: Definition ] In addition to the direct negative consequences, we also introduce indirect negative consequences '' . By doing so our classification distinguishes between any negative behaviour a program has been designed to carry out (direct negative consequences) and security threats introduced by just having that software executing on the system (indirect negative consequences).
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Original: Year Serial Role Notes 1995 Kabhi Yeh Kabhi Woh Vasu 1997 Kya Baat Hai Rangaswami 1998– 1197 Daal Mein Kala Ajay Koshal Kora Kagaz Varsha's brother Do Aur Do Paanch Rahul 1998–2001 Hum Sab Ek Hain Sohan Khachroo 1999 Yeh Duniya Hai Rangeen Balkrishna Namudari 2000Sewalal MewalalMohan Joshi 2001 Rishtey -
Revised: Year Serial Role Notes 1995 Kabhi Yeh Kabhi Woh Vasu 1997 Kya Baat Hai Rangaswami 1998– 1997 Daal Mein Kala Ajay Koshal Kora Kagaz Varsha's brother Do Aur Do Paanch Rahul 1998–2001 Hum Sab Ek Hain Sohan Khachroo 1999 Yeh Duniya Hai Rangeen Balkrishna Namudari 2000Sewalal MewalalMohan Joshi 2001 Rishtey -
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Original: I.D. Jethalal Champaklal GadaGuest
Revised: I.D. Guest
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Original: Dilip Joshi (born in Gosa Village, Porbandar, Gujarat, India on May 26, 1968) is an Indian film and television actor.
Revised: Dilip Joshi (born May 26, 1968) is an Indian film and television actor.
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Original:  Joshi has performed mostly in comedy roles , he initially worked in side roles in bollywood films and then rose to fame for his role as Jethalal Champaklal Gada in the Indian sitcom Taarak Mehta Ka Ooltah Chashmah. 
Revised:  Joshi has performed mostly in comedy roles , he initially worked in side roles in bollywood films and then rose to fame for his role as Jethalal Champaklal Gada in the Indian sitcom Taarak Mehta Ka Ooltah Chashmah. <ref></reference>
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Original: The Intraocular Lens for Visually Impaired Patients (IOLVIP or IOL-VIP) is an intraocular lens  aiming to treat patients with  age related macular degeneration.
Revised: The Intraocular Lens for Visually Impaired Patients (IOLVIP or IOL-VIP) is an intraocular lens system aiming to treat patients with age related macular degeneration.
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Original:   The procedure was pioneered in Italy and has since been brought to the UK and USA , and can be used to treat both the 'wet ' type of macular degeneration , and the more common 'dry ' type .
Revised:  The procedure was pioneered in Italy and has since been taken to the UK and USA , and can be used to treat both the 'wet ' type of macular degeneration , and the more common 'dry ' type .
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Original:  A telescopic simulator can be used to assess whether the surgery will be helpful, and to establish the best rotation for the two lenses   .
Revised:  A telescopic simulator can be used to assess whether the surgery might be helpful, and to establish the best rotation for the two lenses .
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Original:  A telescopic simulator can be used to assess whether the surgery will be helpful, and to establish the best rotation for the two lenses   .
Revised:  A telescopic simulator can be used to assess whether the surgery will be helpful, and to establish the best rotation for the two lenses . .
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Original:  A telescopic simulator can be used to assess whether the surgery might be helpful, and to establish the best rotation for the two lenses.
Revised:  A telescopic simulator can be used to assess whether the surgery might be helpful, and to establish the best rotation for the two URL
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Original:  The IOLVIP procedure involves the surgical implantation of a pair of lenses that magnify and divert the image using the principals of the Galilean URL By arranging the lenses it is possible to direct the image to a different part of the eye than the fovea, which is the centre of the macula and is usually used for detailed vision.
Revised:  The IOLVIP procedure involves the surgical implantation of a pair of lenses that magnify and divert the image using the principals of the Galilean telescope. By arranging the lenses it is possible to direct the image to a different part of the eye than the fovea, which is the centre of the macula and is usually used for detailed vision.
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Original:  It is a procedure to give symptomatic relief rather than treat disease and is best understood as an implanted miniature URL The procedure was pioneered in Italy and has since been taken to the UK and USA.
Revised:  It is a procedure to give symptomatic relief rather than treat disease and is best understood as an implanted miniature telescope. The procedure was pioneered in Italy and has since been taken to the UK and USA.
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Original:  It should not be used in anyone with active (that is changing) macular URL It can be used in both "burned out" wet macular degeneration and in dry or atrophic macular degeneration.
Revised:  It should not be used in anyone with active (that is changing) macular degeneration. It can be used in both "burned out" wet macular degeneration and in dry or atrophic macular degeneration.
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Original:  A telescopic simulator can be used to assess whether the surgery might be helpful, and to establish the best rotation for the two URL
Revised:  A telescopic simulator can be used to assess whether the surgery might be helpful, and to establish the best rotation for the two lenses.
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Original:  Homelessness and criminality No doubt these childhood traumas had an effect on Stuart's mental stability since during his adult life, Shorter was in and out of various homeless hostels, as well as spending much time in prison for a number of violent crimes.
Revised:  During his adult life, Shorter was in and out of various homeless hostels, as well as spending much time in prison for a number of violent crimes.
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Original:  Stuart had two siblings: an older brother, Gavvy  and a younger sister, Karen .
Revised:  Stuart had two siblings: an older brother, Gavvy , and a younger sister, Karen .
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Original: Death On July 6th, 2002, just outside his home village of Waterbeach, Stuart Shorter stepped in front of the 11.15 p.m. London to King's Lynn train, and was killed instantly.
Revised: Death On 6 July 2002, just outside his home village of Waterbeach, Stuart Shorter stepped in front of the 11.15 p.m. London to King's Lynn train, and was killed instantly.
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Original: Stuart Shorter (born Stuart Clive Turner on 19 September 1968 in Cambridge - died 6 July 2002 in Waterbeach, Cambridgeshire) was a homeless man and advocate whose life was chronicled by Alexander Masters in his book Stuart : A Life Backwards.
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Original: Stuart Shorter (born Stuart Clive Turner on 19 September 1968 in Cambridge - died 6 July 2002 in Waterbeach, Cambridgeshire) was a homeless man and advocate whose life was chronicled by Alexander Masters in his book Stuart : A Life Backwards.
Revised: Stuart Shorter (born Stuart Clive Turner on 19 September 1968 in Cambridge - died 6 July 2002 in Waterbeach, Cambridgeshire) was a homeless man and advocate whose life was chronicled by Alexander Masters in his book Stuart : A Life 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Life After Stuart - The Observer Category:People with disabilities Category:1968 births Category:2002 deat
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:People with disabilities Category:1968 births Category:2002 deat
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Original: EpiData refers to a group of applications used in combination for creating documented data structures and analysis of quantitative data.
Revised: EpiData is a group of applications used in combination for creating documented data structures and analysis of quantitative data.
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Original:  Weltschmerz (from the German, literally world-pain, also world weariness, ) is a term coined by the German author Jean Paul.
Revised:  (from the German, literally world-pain, also world weariness, ) is a term coined by the German author Jean Paul.
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Original:  In its original meaning in the Deutsches Wörterbuch by Brothers Grimm, it denotes a deep sadness about the inadequacy or imperfection of the world ( tiefe Traurigkeit über die Unzulänglichkeit der Welt ).
Revised:  In its original meaning in the by Brothers Grimm, it denotes a deep sadness about the inadequacy or imperfection of the world ( tiefe Traurigkeit über die Unzulänglichkeit der Welt ).
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Original:  In its original meaning in the Deutsches Wörterbuch by Brothers Grimm, it denotes a deep sadness about the inadequacy or imperfection of the world ( tiefe Traurigkeit über die Unzulänglichkeit der Welt ).
Revised:  In its original meaning in the Deutsches Wörterbuch by Brothers Grimm, it denotes a deep sadness about the inadequacy or imperfection of the world ( ).
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Original:  Beiser defines Weltschmerz more broadly as "a mood of weariness or sadness about life arising from the acute awareness of evil and suffering", and notes that by the 1860s the word was used ironically in Germany to refer to oversensitivity to those same concerns.
Revised:  Beiser defines more broadly as "a mood of weariness or sadness about life arising from the acute awareness of evil and suffering", and notes that by the 1860s the word was used ironically in Germany to refer to oversensitivity to those same concerns.
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Original:  Further examples In Tropic of Cancer, Henry Miller describes an acquaintance, "Moldorf", who has prescriptions for Weltschmerz on scraps of paper in his pocket.
Revised:  Further examples In Tropic of Cancer, Henry Miller describes an acquaintance, "Moldorf", who has prescriptions for on scraps of paper in his pocket.
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Original:  In John D MacDonald's novel "Freefall in Crimson", Travis McGee describes weltzschmerz as "homesickness for a place you have never seen."
Revised:  In John D MacDonald's novel "Freefall in Crimson", Travis McGee describes as "homesickness for a place you have never seen."
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Original:  Acedia Angst Dukkha Lacrimae rerum Mal du siècle Mean world syndrome Melancholia Mono no aware Philosophical pessimism Nihilism Pathos Saudade Sehnsucht Social alienation Sturm und Drang Suffering Theory of mind Ubi sunt World view
Revised:  Acedia Angst Dukkha Mean world syndrome Melancholia Mono no aware Philosophical pessimism Nihilism Pathos Saudade Sehnsucht Social alienation Sturm und Drang Suffering Theory of mind Ubi sunt World view
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Original:  Acedia Angst Dukkha Lacrimae rerum Mal du siècle Mean world syndrome Melancholia Mono no aware Philosophical pessimism Nihilism Pathos Saudade Sehnsucht Social alienation Sturm und Drang Suffering Theory of mind Ubi sunt World view
Revised:  Acedia Angst Dukkha Lacrimae rerum Mal du siècle Mean world syndrome Melancholia Mono no aware Philosophical pessimism Nihilism Pathos Saudade Social alienation Suffering Theory of mind Ubi sunt World view
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Original:  (from the German, literally world-pain, also world weariness, ) is a term coined by the German author Jean Paul in his 1827 novel , Selina.
Revised:  (from the German, literally world-pain, also world weariness, ) is a term coined by the German author Jean Paul in his 1827 novel Selina.
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Original:  In John D  MacDonald's novel "Freefall in Crimson", Travis McGee describes as "homesickness for a place you have never seen."
Revised:  In John D . MacDonald's novel "Freefall in Crimson", Travis McGee describes as "homesickness for a place you have never seen."
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Original:  (from the German, literally world-pain, also world weariness , ) is a term coined by the German author Jean Paul in his 1827 novel Selina.
Revised:  (from the German, literally world-pain, also world-weariness , ) is a term coined by the German author Jean Paul in his 1827 novel Selina.
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Original:  MacDonald's novel " Free Fall in Crimson " , Travis McGee describes as "homesickness for a place you have never seen."
Revised:  MacDonald's novel Free Fall in Crimson " , Travis McGee describes as "homesickness for a place you have never seen."
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Original:  MacDonald's novel " Free Fall in Crimson " , Travis McGee describes as "homesickness for a place you have never seen."
Revised:  MacDonald's novel " Free Fall in Crimson , Travis McGee describes as "homesickness for a place you have never seen."
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Original: Animal coloration is the general appearance of an animal resulting from the reflection or emission of light from its surfaces . Some animals are brightly coloured, while others are hard to see.
Revised: Animal coloration is the general appearance of an animal . Some animals are brightly coloured, while others are hard to see.
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Original: File:Orientalischer Süßlippfisch.jpg|upright=1.25|A brilliantly-coloured oriental sweetlips fish (Plectorhinchus vittatus) waits while two boldly-patterned cleaner wrasse (Labroides dimidiatus) pick parasites from its skin.
Revised: File:Orientalischer Süßlippfisch.jpg|upright=1.25|A brilliantly-colored oriental sweetlips fish (Plectorhinchus vittatus) waits while two boldly-patterned cleaner wrasse (Labroides dimidiatus) pick parasites from its skin.
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Original:  Some animals are brightly coloured , while others are hard to see.
Revised:  Some animals are brightly colored , while others are hard to see.
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Original:  In some species, such as the peafowl, the male has strong patterns, conspicuous colours and is iridescent, while the female is far less visible.
Revised:  In some species, such as the peafowl, the male has strong patterns, conspicuous colors and is iridescent, while the female is far less visible.
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Original:  There are several separate reasons why animals have evolved colours . Camouflage enables an animal to remain hidden from view.
Revised:  There are several separate reasons why animals have evolved colors . Camouflage enables an animal to remain hidden from view.
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Original:  Animals use colour to advertise services such as cleaning to animals of other species;
Revised:  Animals use color to advertise services such as cleaning to animals of other species;
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Original:  Some animals use flashes of colour to divert attacks by startling predators.
Revised:  Some animals use flashes of color to divert attacks by startling predators.
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Original:  Some animals are coloured for physical protection, with pigments in the skin to protect against sunburn, while some frogs can lighten or darken their skin for temperature regulation.
Revised:  Some animals are colored for physical protection, with pigments in the skin to protect against sunburn, while some frogs can lighten or darken their skin for temperature regulation.
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Original:  Finally, animals can be coloured incidentally.
Revised:  Finally, animals can be colored incidentally.
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Original:  Animals coloured in these ways can have striking natural patterns.
Revised:  Animals colored in these ways can have striking natural patterns.
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Original:  Animals produce colour in both direct and indirect ways.
Revised:  Animals produce color in both direct and indirect ways.
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Original:  Direct production occurs through the presence of visible coloured cells known as pigment which are particles of coloured material such as freckles.
Revised:  Direct production occurs through the presence of visible colored cells known as pigment which are particles of coloured material such as freckles.
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Original:  Direct production occurs through the presence of visible coloured cells known as pigment which are particles of coloured material such as freckles.
Revised:  Direct production occurs through the presence of visible coloured cells known as pigment which are particles of colored material such as freckles.
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Original:  For fishes it has been demonstrated that chromatophores may respond directly to environmental stimuli like visible light, UV-radiation, temperature, pH, chemicals, etc. colour change helps individuals in becoming more or less visible and is important in agonistic displays and in camouflage.
Revised:  For fishes it has been demonstrated that chromatophores may respond directly to environmental stimuli like visible light, UV-radiation, temperature, pH, chemicals, etc. color change helps individuals in becoming more or less visible and is important in agonistic displays and in camouflage.
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Original:  Some animals, including many butterflies and birds, have microscopic structures in scales, bristles or feathers which give them brilliant iridescent colours .
Revised:  Some animals, including many butterflies and birds, have microscopic structures in scales, bristles or feathers which give them brilliant iridescent colors .
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Original:  Other animals including squid and some deep-sea fish can produce light, sometimes of different colours . Animals often use two or more of these mechanisms together to produce the colours and effects they need.
Revised:  Other animals including squid and some deep-sea fish can produce light, sometimes of different colors . Animals often use two or more of these mechanisms together to produce the colours and effects they need.
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Original:  Other animals including squid and some deep-sea fish can produce light, sometimes of different colours . Animals often use two or more of these mechanisms together to produce the colours and effects they need.
Revised:  Other animals including squid and some deep-sea fish can produce light, sometimes of different colours . Animals often use two or more of these mechanisms together to produce the colors and effects they need.
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Original: In his 1665 book Micrographia, Robert Hooke describes the "fantastical" (structural, not pigment) colours of the Peacock's feathers:Hooke, Robert (1665) Micrographia.
Revised: In his 1665 book Micrographia, Robert Hooke describes the "fantastical" (structural, not pigment) colors of the Peacock's feathers:Hooke, Robert (1665) Micrographia.
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Original:  Edward Bagnall Poulton's strongly Darwinian 1890 book The Colours of Animals, their meaning and use, especially considered in the case of insects argued the case for three aspects of animal coloration that are broadly accepted today but were controversial or wholly new at the time.
Revised:  Edward Bagnall Poulton's strongly Darwinian 1890 book The Colors of Animals, their meaning and use, especially considered in the case of insects argued the case for three aspects of animal coloration that are broadly accepted today but were controversial or wholly new at the time.
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Original:  The book introduced the concept of frequency-dependent selection, as when edible mimics are less frequent than the distasteful models whose colours and patterns they copy.
Revised:  The book introduced the concept of frequency-dependent selection, as when edible mimics are less frequent than the distasteful models whose colors and patterns they copy.
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Original:  Animal Coloration, An Account of the Principal Facts and Theories Relating to the Colours and Markings of Animals.
Revised:  Animal Coloration, An Account of the Principal Facts and Theories Relating to the Colors and Markings of Animals.
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Original: Mechanisms of colour production in animals [[File:Zfishchroma.jpg|upright=0.
Revised: Mechanisms of color production in animals [[File:Zfishchroma.jpg|upright=0.
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Original: ]] Pigments are coloured chemicals (such as melanin) in animal tissues.
Revised: ]] Pigments are colored chemicals (such as melanin) in animal tissues.
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Original:  Many animals, including mammals, birds, and amphibians, are unable to synthesize most of the pigments that colour their fur or feathers, other than the brown or black melanins that give many mammals their earth tones.
Revised:  Many animals, including mammals, birds, and amphibians, are unable to synthesize most of the pigments that color their fur or feathers, other than the brown or black melanins that give many mammals their earth tones.
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Original:  The shrimps derive their body colour from microscopic red algae, which like most plants are able to create their own pigments, including both carotenoids and (green) chlorophyll.
Revised:  The shrimps derive their body color from microscopic red algae, which like most plants are able to create their own pigments, including both carotenoids and (green) chlorophyll.
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Original:  Fish and frog melanophores are cells that can change colour by dispersing or aggregating pigment-containing bodies.
Revised:  Fish and frog melanophores are cells that can change color by dispersing or aggregating pigment-containing bodies.
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