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Original:  He produced a third edition of his history of South Africa in 1957 (retitled A history of Southern Africa) and edited the second edition of the South African volume of The Cambridge history of the British Empire, published in 1963.
Revised:  He produced a third edition of his history of South Africa in 1957 (retitled A history of Southern Africa) and edited the second edition of the South African volume of The Cambridge History of the British Empire, published in 1963.
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Original:   South Africa He was employed as a lecturer at the University of Bristol , but in  1911  took up a lectureship at the South African College in Cape Town, subsequently the University of Cape Town, where he was soon appointed  Professor of History at age only 24.
Revised:  Career South Africa He was employed as a lecturer at the University of Bristol , but in 1911 took up a lectureship at the South African College in Cape Town, subsequently the University of Cape Town, where he was soon appointed Professor of History at age only 24.
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Original:   South Africa He was employed as a lecturer at the University of Bristol , but in  1911  took up a lectureship at the South African College in Cape Town, subsequently the University of Cape Town, where he was soon appointed  Professor of History at age only 24.
Revised:  South Africa He was employed as a lecturer at the University of Bristol , but in In 1911 took up a lectureship at the South African College in Cape Town, subsequently the University of Cape Town, where he was soon appointed Professor of History at age only 24.
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Original:   South Africa He was employed as a lecturer at the University of Bristol , but in  1911  took up a lectureship at the South African College in Cape Town, subsequently the University of Cape Town, where he was soon appointed  Professor of History at age only 24.
Revised:  South Africa He was employed as a lecturer at the University of Bristol , but in 1911 took up a lectureship at the South African College in Cape Town, subsequently the University of Cape Town, where he was soon appointed as a Professor of History at age only 24.
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Original:   South Africa He was employed as a lecturer at the University of Bristol , but in  1911  took up a lectureship at the South African College in Cape Town, subsequently the University of Cape Town, where he was soon appointed  Professor of History at age only 24.
Revised:  South Africa He was employed as a lecturer at the University of Bristol , but in 1911 took up a lectureship at the South African College in Cape Town, subsequently the University of Cape Town, where he was soon appointed Professor of History at an age of 24.
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Original:  He wrote the first historical atlas of South Africa in 1922, the first one-volume history of South Africa for use in schools in 1926, and in 1928, Trends in South African historiography and the present state of historical research Paper presented at the Nordic Africa Institute, Uppsala, Sweden, 23 September 2004 by Wessel Visser, University of Stellenbosch.
Revised:  He wrote the first historical atlas of South Africa in 1922, the first one-volume history of South Africa for the school-final examination in 1926, and in 1928, Trends in South African historiography and the present state of historical research Paper presented at the Nordic Africa Institute, Uppsala, Sweden, 23 September 2004 by Wessel Visser, University of Stellenbosch.
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Original:  Retrieved 21 May 2014. the first important general history of South Africa written before World War II . He was an accomplished biographer, writing the lives of Lord Henry de Villiers, the former chief justice of the Cape (1925), and W.P. Schreiner (1937).
Revised:  Retrieved 21 May 2014. the first important general history of South Africa . He was an accomplished biographer, writing the lives of Lord Henry de Villiers, the former chief justice of the Cape (1925), and W.P. Schreiner (1937).
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Original:  Walker married Lucy Stapleton (1883–1977) – daughter of Edward Stapleton (1883–1977) and Susanna Margaretha née de Smidt (1861–1939) – in 1913 in Cape Town;
Revised:  Walker married Lucy Stapleton (1883–1977) – in 1913 in Cape Town;
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Original:  He was an accomplished biographer, writing the lives of Lord Henry de Villiers, the former chief justice of the Cape (1925) , and W.P. Schreiner (1937) .
Revised:  He was an accomplished biographer, writing the lives of Lord Henry de Villiers, the former chief justice of the Cape (1925) and W.P. Schreiner (1937) .
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Original:  He felt his most readable and long-lasting work was his history of The Great Trek (1934) which he told as a romantic adventure story and which went through many editions.
Revised:  He felt his most readable and long-lasting work was his history of The Great Trek (1934) in the narrative of a romantic adventure story and which went through many editions.
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Original:  He felt his most readable and long-lasting work was his history of The Great Trek (1934) which he told as a romantic adventure story and which went through many editions.
Revised:  He felt his most readable and long-lasting work was his history of The Great Trek (1934) which he told as a romantic adventure 
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Original:  He was a captain of a regiment at the Cape Garrison Artillery and left it due to cardiac ailments from lifting of heavy ammunition .
Revised:  and later, deemed it to be his best work .
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Original:  The frontier tradition in South African history In 1930 Walker gave an influential lecture in Oxford,
Revised:  In 1930 Walker gave an influential lecture in Oxford,
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Original:  He was in a mental hospital for over a year , and in July 1946  underwent a leucotomy (lobotomy), which involved the removal of part of his brain.
Revised:  He was in a mental hospital for over a year . In July 1946 underwent a leucotomy (lobotomy), which involved the removal of part of his brain.
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Original:  most of the students and faculties had left for the war.
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Original:  Other converted to Anglicanism or Reformed Christianity under British rule and Dutch rule  .
Revised:  Other converted to Anglicanism or Reformed Christianity under British rule and Dutch rule , respectively .
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Original:  They settled mostly in westernSri Lanka, especially in the ports of Jaffna, Colombo and Galle from the 16th century to mid 17th century, during the rule of the Portuguese and Dutch.
Revised:  They settled mostly in western Sri Lanka, especially in the ports of Jaffna, Colombo and Galle from the 16th century to mid 17th century, during the rule of the Portuguese and Dutch.
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Original: Sri Lankan Chetties (, ) also known as Jaffna Chetties Colombo Chetties, is an ethnicity in the island of Sri Lanka.
Revised: Sri Lankan Chetties (, ) also known as Colombo Chetties, is an ethnicity in the island of Sri Lanka.
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Original:  He had two prominent uncles: the noted doctor Hillel Yaffe and agronomist ;
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Original:  He had two prominent uncles: the noted doctor Hillel Yaffe and agronomist and Zionist activist Chaim Margaliot Kalvarisky .
Revised:  He had two prominent uncles: the noted doctor Hillel Yaffe and agronomist and Zionist activist .
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Original: Machanavajjhala et. al. (2007) define “well-represented” in three possible ways: Distinct l-diversity – The simplest definition ensures that at least l distinct values for the sensitive field in each equivalence class  . Entropy l-diversity – The most complex definition defines Entropy of an equivalent class E to be the negation of summation of s across the domain of the sensitive attribute of p(E,s)log(p(E,s)) where p(E,s) is the fraction of records in E that have the sensitive value s.
Revised: Machanavajjhala et. al. (2007) define “well-represented” in three possible ways: Distinct l-diversity – The simplest definition ensures that at least l distinct values for the sensitive field in each equivalence class exist . Entropy l-diversity – The most complex definition defines Entropy of an equivalent class E to be the negation of summation of s across the domain of the sensitive attribute of p(E,s)log(p(E,s)) where p(E,s) is the fraction of records in E that have the sensitive value s.
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Original: Dynamic stock modelling (DSM) is a new development in Material flow accounting and explicitly considers the role of in-use stocks in past, present, and future material use.
Revised: Dynamic stock modelling (DSM) is a new development in material flow accounting and explicitly considers the role of in-use stocks in past, present, and future material use.
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Original:  Dynamic Stock Modelling for Resource Use In-use stocks of buildings, infrastructure, and (durable) products play several important roles in social metabolismPauliuk , S., Müller, D.B., 2013.
Revised:  For resource use In-use stocks of buildings, infrastructure, and (durable) products play several important roles in social metabolismPauliuk , S., Müller, D.B., 2013.
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Original:  Dynamic Stock Modelling for Resource Use In-use stocks of buildings, infrastructure, and (durable) products play several important roles in social metabolismPauliuk , S., Müller, D.B., 2013.
Revised:  Dynamic Stock Modelling for Resource Use In-use stocks of buildings, infrastructure, and (durable) products play several important roles in social metabolism:Pauliuk , S., Müller, D.B., 2013.
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Original:  URL Further DSM Applications DSM is the basis for many other types of modelling;
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Original:   John Howkins (2001;
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Original:  2nd Edition, 2013), The Creative Economy, Chap 1. According to Howkins, current issues in the creative economy includeJohn Howkins, ‘Current Issues in Creative Economies’, Drucker School of Management, 2014. :
Revised:  2nd Edition, 2013), The Creative Economy, Chap 1. According to Howkins, current issues in the creative economy includeJohn Howkins, ‘Current Issues in Creative Economies’, Drucker School of Management, 2014. 
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Original:  UNCTAD, ‘Creative Economy Report 2013’, UNCTAD.
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Original:  Education and Learning Intellectual property (proprietorial and open source) Management Digital and Online Policy Pricing Public statistics (definitions) Software Start-ups Tax Urban design Work See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Creativity Creative Industries Creative Class Creative Cities Digital Economies Intellectual Property References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further Reading Daniel Araya and Michael Peters, ‘Education in the Creative Economy:
Revised:  Education and Learning Intellectual property (proprietorial and open source) Management Digital and Online Policy Pricing Public statistics (definitions) Software Start-ups Tax Urban design See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Creativity Creative Industries Creative Class Creative Cities Digital Economies Intellectual Property References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further Reading Daniel Araya and Michael Peters, ‘Education in the Creative Economy:
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Original:  Education and Learning Intellectual property (proprietorial and open source) Management Digital and Online Policy Pricing Public statistics (definitions) Software Start-ups Tax Urban design Work See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Creativity Creative Industries Creative Class Creative Cities Digital Economies Intellectual Property References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further Reading Daniel Araya and Michael Peters, ‘Education in the Creative Economy:
Revised:  Education and Learning Intellectual property (proprietorial and open source) Management Digital and Online Policy Pricing Public statistics (definitions) Software Start-ups Tax Urban design Work %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Creativity Creative Industries Creative Class Creative Cities Digital Economies Intellectual Property References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further Reading Daniel Araya and Michael Peters, ‘Education in the Creative Economy:
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Revised:  Education and Learning Intellectual property (proprietorial and open source) Management Digital and Online Policy Pricing Public statistics (definitions) Software Start-ups Tax Urban design Work See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further Reading Daniel Araya and Michael Peters, ‘Education in the Creative Economy:
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Original:  Education and Learning Intellectual property (proprietorial and open source) Management Digital and Online Policy Pricing Public statistics (definitions) Software Start-ups Tax Urban design Work See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Creativity Creative Industries Creative Class Creative Cities Digital Economies Intellectual Property References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further Reading Daniel Araya and Michael Peters, ‘Education in the Creative Economy:
Revised:  Education and Learning Intellectual property (proprietorial and open source) Management Digital and Online Policy Pricing Public statistics (definitions) Software Start-ups Tax Urban design Work See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Creativity Creative Industries Creative Class Creative Cities Digital Economies Intellectual Property %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further Reading Daniel Araya and Michael Peters, ‘Education in the Creative Economy:
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Original:  Education and Learning Intellectual property (proprietorial and open source) Management Digital and Online Policy Pricing Public statistics (definitions) Software Start-ups Tax Urban design Work See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Creativity Creative Industries Creative Class Creative Cities Digital Economies Intellectual Property References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further Reading Daniel Araya and Michael Peters, ‘Education in the Creative Economy:
Revised:  Education and Learning Intellectual property (proprietorial and open source) Management Digital and Online Policy Pricing Public statistics (definitions) Software Start-ups Tax Urban design Work See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Creativity Creative Industries Creative Class Creative Cities Digital Economies Intellectual Property References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Daniel Araya and Michael Peters, ‘Education in the Creative Economy:
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Original:  Some credit the NDP's success to the Liberal Party government's controversial reforms of the Unemployment Insurance system.
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Original:  In the last five years junior lightweights Marco Antonio Barrera, Erik Morales, Juan Manuel Márquez , Ryan Garcia, and multiple weight division champion Manny Pacquiao have fought numerous times on pay-per-view.
Revised:  In the last five years junior lightweights Marco Antonio Barrera, Erik Morales, Juan Manuel Márquez and multiple weight division champion Manny Pacquiao have fought numerous times on pay-per-view.
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Original:  After 1920, the National Boxing Association (NBA) began to sanction "title fights . "  Also during that time, The Ring was founded, and it listed champions and awarded championship belts.
Revised:  After 1920, the National Boxing Association (NBA) began to sanction "title fights " Also during that time, The Ring was founded, and it listed champions and awarded championship belts.
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Original:  After 1920, the National Boxing Association (NBA) began to sanction "title fights . "  Also during that time, The Ring was founded, and it listed champions and awarded championship belts.
Revised:  After 1920, the National Boxing Association (NBA) began to sanction "title fights . " . Also during that time, The Ring was founded, and it listed champions and awarded championship belts.
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Original: See also Amateur boxing Boxing Citations Combat sports: Professional boxing championship rules;
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Original: 1920 to 1940 Jack Dempsey in the ring In 1920, the Walker Law legalised prizefighting in New York state by establishing the New York State Athletic Commission.
Revised: 1920 to Jack Dempsey in the ring In 1920, the Walker Law legalised prizefighting in New York state by establishing the New York State Athletic Commission.
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Original:  2000 to present%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:VladimirVitaliy.jpg|The Ukrainian Klitschko brothers, Wladimir and Vitali The last decade has witnessed a continued decline in the popularity of boxing in the United States, marked by a malaise in the heavyweight division and the increased competition in the Pay-Per-View market from MMA and its main promotion, the UFC.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:VladimirVitaliy.jpg|The Ukrainian Klitschko brothers, Wladimir and Vitali The last decade has witnessed a continued decline in the popularity of boxing in the United States, marked by a malaise in the heavyweight division and the increased competition in the Pay-Per-View market from MMA and its main promotion, the UFC.
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