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Original: Victoria "Vicky" Syquía Quiríno-González (née Quiríno ;
Revised: Victoria "Vicky" Syquia Quirino-Gonzalez (née Quiríno ;
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Original: Victoria "Vicky" Syquía Quiríno-González (née Quiríno ;
Revised: Victoria "Vicky" Syquía Quiríno-González (née Quirino ;
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Original:  May 18, 1931 – November 29, 2006) was the second daughter of Philippine President Elpidío Quiríno . Since her father was a widower, she served as First Lady of the Philippines, becoming the youngest bearer of the title at the age of 16.
Revised:  May 18, 1931 – November 29, 2006) was the second daughter of Philippine President Elpidio Quirino . Since her father was a widower, she served as First Lady of the Philippines, becoming the youngest bearer of the title at the age of 16.
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Original:  Her mother, Alicia Syquía , as well as three siblings, were all massacred by Japanese troops as they occupied the country during the Second World War.
Revised:  Her mother, Alicia Syquia , as well as three siblings, were all massacred by Japanese troops as they occupied the country during the Second World War.
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Original: Victoria "Vicky" Syquia Quirino-Gonzalez ( née Quirino;
Revised: Victoria "Vicky" Quirino-Gonzalez ( née Quirino;
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Original: Victoria "Vicky" Syquia Quirino-Gonzalez ( née Quirino;
Revised: Victoria "Vicky" Syquia Quirino-Gonzalez ( born Victoria Syquia Quirino;
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Original:  Her mother, Alicia Syquia, as well as three  siblings, were all massacred by Japanese troops as they occupied the country during the Second World War.
Revised:  Her mother, Alicia Syquia, as well as three of her siblings, were all massacred by Japanese troops as they occupied the country during the Second World War.
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Original:  Glyph denoting Tepanecs The   Tepanecs or Tepaneca are a Mesoamerican people who arrived in the Valley of Mexico in the late 12th or early 13th centuries.
Revised:  Glyph denoting Tepanecs The The Tepanecs or Tepaneca are a Mesoamerican people who arrived in the Valley of Mexico in the late 12th or early 13th centuries.
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Original:  Reputedly welcomed to the Valley of Mexico by the semi-legendary Chichimeca ruler Xolotl, the Tepanecs settled on the west shores of Lake Texcoco.
Revised:  Reputedly welcomed to the Valley of Mexico by the semi-legendary Chichimec a ruler Xolotl, the Tepanecs settled on the west shores of Lake Texcoco.
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Original:  With the rise of the Aztec empire, Tlacopan became the predominant Tepanec city, although both Tenochtitlan and Texcoco eclipsed Tlacopan in size and prestige.   
Revised:  With the rise of the Aztec empire, Tlacopan became the predominant Tepanec city, although both Tenochtitlan and Texcoco eclipsed Tlacopan in size and prestige. Notas
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Original:  a place wich has no certain location, and while, during the middle of the 20th Century, the general opinion was that La Quemada had to be the place, in the opinion of later investigators the city must've been north of the Valley of Mexico, or towards the ancient Tula, even in the Chiconauhtla hill, south of Teotihuacan).
Revised:  a place which has no certain location, and while, during the middle of the 20th Century, the general opinion was that La Quemada had to be the place, in the opinion of later investigators the city must've been north of the Valley of Mexico, or towards the ancient Tula, even in the Chiconauhtla hill, south of Teotihuacan).
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Original: According to the traidition recopilated by several historians, the Tepanec people constituted one of the seven tribes that started the migration from Chicomoztoc (in nahuatl, "The Seven Caves");
Revised: According to the tradition recompiled by several historians, the Tepanec people constituted one of the seven tribes that started the migration from Chicomoztoc (in nahuatl, "The Seven Caves");
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Original:  To the Tepaneca tribe corresponded , by their military might, one of the best zones where they founded Azcapotzalco main Altepetl of their territory, known as Tepanecapan.
Revised:  To the Tepaneca tribe belonged , by their military might, one of the best zones where they founded Azcapotzalco main Altepetl of their territory, known as Tepanecapan.
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Original:  When the Spaniard conquistadores arrived to the Valley of Mexico, the Tepaneca tribe was subject to the Triple Alliance, lead by Tenochtitlan, not able to remain as an ethnic group , there's only reference to their existence thanks to the prehispanic tradition of codex and recopilated stories by novohispanic historians.
Revised:  When the Spaniard conquistadores arrived to the Valley of Mexico, the Tepaneca tribe was subject to the Triple Alliance, lead by Tenochtitlan, not able to remain as an ethnic group . We know of their existence thanks to the prehispanic tradition of codex and recopilated stories by novohispanic historians.
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Original:  When the Spaniard conquistadores arrived to the Valley of Mexico, the Tepaneca tribe was subject to the Triple Alliance, lead by Tenochtitlan, not able to remain as an ethnic group , there's only reference to their existence thanks to the prehispanic tradition of codex and recopilated stories by novohispanic historians.
Revised:  When the Spaniard conquistadores arrived to the Valley of Mexico, the Tepaneca tribe was subject to the Triple Alliance, lead by Tenochtitlan, not able to remain as an ethnic group , there's only reference to their existence thanks to references in stories derived from the prehispanic codex traditions, which were compiled by novohispanic historians.
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Original:  The Tepanecs or Tepaneca are a Mesoamerican people who arrived in the Valley of Mexico in the late 12th or early 13th centuries.
Revised:  Tepanecs or Tepaneca are a Mesoamerican people who arrived in the Valley of Mexico in the late 12th or early 13th centuries.
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Original:   Reputedly welcomed to the Valley of Mexico by the semi-legendary Chichimec a ruler Xolotl, the Tepanecs settled on the west shores of Lake Texcoco.
Revised:  Reputedly welcomed to the Valley of Mexico by the semi-legendary Chichimec ruler Xolotl, the Tepanecs settled on the west shores of Lake Texcoco.
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Original:  In the early 14th century, Tezozomoc brought the Tepanec to their height of power;
Revised:  In the early 14th century, Tezozomoc brought the Tepanec to the height of their power;
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Original:  a place which has no certain location, and while, during the middle of the 20th Century , the general opinion was that La Quemada had to be the place, in the opinion of later investigators the city must've been north of the Valley of Mexico, or towards the ancient Tula, even in the Chiconauhtla hill, south of Teotihuacan).
Revised:  a place which has no certain location, and while, during the middle of the 20th century , the general opinion was that La Quemada had to be the place, in the opinion of later investigators the city must've been north of the Valley of Mexico, or towards the ancient Tula, even in the Chiconauhtla hill, south of Teotihuacan).
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Original:  He is a member of the Bharatiya Janata Party  and a member of Gujarat Legislative Assembly representing Ghatlodia constituency.
Revised:  He is a member of the Bharatiya Janata Party (BJP) and a member of Gujarat Legislative Assembly representing Ghatlodia constituency.
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Original:  Patel was unanimously elected as the BJP legislative party leader and Chief Minister elect of Gujarat on 12 September 2021 in the party legislature meeting at Gandhinagar presided by central observers Narendra Singh Tomar and Prahlad Joshi .
Revised:  Patel was unanimously elected as the BJP legislative party leader and Chief Minister elect of Gujarat on 12 September 2021 in the party legislature meeting at Gandhinagar .
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Original:  He  started his political career in municipal bodies of Ahmedabad before being elected the member of Gujarat Legislative Assembly representing Ghatlodia constituency in 2017.
Revised:  He had supposedly started his political career in municipal bodies of Ahmedabad before being elected the member of Gujarat Legislative Assembly representing Ghatlodia constituency in 2017.
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Original:  He had supposedly started his political career in municipal bodies of Ahmedabad before being elected the member of Gujarat Legislative Assembly representing Ghatlodia constituency in 2017.
Revised:  He started his political career in municipal bodies of Ahmedabad before being elected the member of Gujarat Legislative Assembly representing Ghatlodia constituency in 2017.
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Original:  He has been associated with Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh. B.R. Patel is a builder by profession.
Revised:  He has been associated with Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh. He is a builder by profession.
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Original:  In fact, the 10nt-century Yemeni historian Abu Muhammad al-Hasan al-Hamdani mentions several cities with such a name.
Revised:  In fact, the 10th century Yemeni historian Abu Muhammad al-Hasan al-Hamdani mentions several cities with such a name.
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Original:  Less probable suggestions include the Ekara temple of FailakaGlassner 1988, pp. 240-243. and Bahrain Island.
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Original:  Possible locations Failaka Island Agarum is generally thought to be the Failaka Island, located near the coast of Kuwait.
Revised:  Possible locations Kuwait's Failaka Island Agarum is generally thought to be the Failaka Island, located near the coast of Kuwait.
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Original:  He also used "Crepusculo" to launch an initiative to address the issue of abandined infants, calling for the creation of shelters for infants in order to keep them in families and remove any criminal propensity to infanticide (per "conservare i bambini nelle famiglie e togliere ogni spinta criminosa agli infanticidi").
Revised:  He also used "Crepusculo" to launch an initiative to address the pressing issue of abandoned infants, calling for the creation of shelters for infants in order to keep them in families and remove any criminal propensity to infanticide (per "conservare i bambini nelle famiglie e togliere ogni spinta criminosa agli infanticidi").
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Original:  He became a member of the committee overseeing the orphanages and in the end appointed r3egional director for orphanages, a post that he held from 1866 till 1885.
Revised:  He became a member of the committee overseeing the orphanages and in the end appointed regional director for orphanages, a post that he held from 1866 till 1885.
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Original:  He became a member of the committee overseeing the orphanages and in the end appointed regional director for orphanages, a post that he held from 1866 till 1885.
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Original:  He  became a member of the committee overseeing the orphanages and in the end appointed regional director for orphanages, a post that he held from 1866 till 1885. 
Revised:  He became a member of the committee overseeing the orphanages and was then appointed regional director for orphanages, a post that he held from 1866 till 1885. 
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Original:  The expulsion of the Austrian meant an end to censorship and unleashed a proliferation of leaflets, pamphlets and newspapers.
Revised:  The expulsion of the Austrians meant an end to censorship and unleashed a proliferation of leaflets, pamphlets and newspapers.
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Original: Johann Wilhelm Gottlob Buzengeiger (born on 25 June 1778 in Tübingen and died there on 26 October 1836 as well) was a university mechanic, optician and watchmaker in Tübingen. . G. Hellmann: Repetitorium der deutschen Meteorologie.
Revised: Johann Wilhelm Gottlob Buzengeiger (born on 25 June 1778 in Tübingen and died there on 26 October 1836 as well) was a university mechanic, optician and watchmaker in Tübingen. G. Hellmann: Repetitorium der deutschen Meteorologie.
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Original:  Geschichte der Physik (GP) For the survey planned by Bohnenberger, he made in 1818 replicas of the Toise du Pérou and a heliostat to a design by Carl Friedrich Gauss, a gyroscope as an astronomical demonstration object (1817), a reversion pendulum for accurate calculation of gravity (1811) as well as an electroscope invented by Bohnenberger for determining the electric charge.
Revised:  For the survey planned by Bohnenberger, he made in 1818 replicas of the Toise du Pérou and a heliostat to a design by Carl Friedrich Gauss, a gyroscope as an astronomical demonstration object (1817), a reversion pendulum for accurate calculation of gravity (1811) as well as an electroscope invented by Bohnenberger for determining the electric charge.
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Original:  In: Schwäbische Heimat, 71 (2020), Nr . 2, S . 170--178
Revised:  In: Schwäbische Heimat, 71 (2020), no . 2, S . 170--178
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Original: For the survey planned by Bohnenberger, he made in 1818 replicas of the Toise du Pérou and a heliostat to a design by Carl Friedrich Gauss, a gyro with cardanic suspension ("gyroscope ", Machine of Bohnenberger) as an astronomical demonstration object ( 1810 ), a reversion pendulum for accurate calculation of gravity (1811) as well as an electroscope invented by Bohnenberger for determining the electric charge.
Revised: For the survey planned by Bohnenberger, he made in 1818 replicas of the Toise du Pérou and a heliostat to a design by Carl Friedrich Gauss, a gyroscope as an astronomical demonstration object ( 1810 ), a reversion pendulum for accurate calculation of gravity (1811) as well as an electroscope invented by Bohnenberger for determining the electric charge.
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Original:  She was hit repeatedly on the head and choked to death, before police arrived to apprehend her attacker.
Revised:  She was hit repeatedly on the head and strangled to death, before police arrived to apprehend her attacker.
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Original: Deaths by strangulation in the United States Category:Homeless people Category:Murdered African-American people Category:American murder victims Category:Musicians from Fresno, California Category:Musicians from Orange County, California Category:People from Mississippi Category:People from Santa Ana, California Category:People murdered in California Category:Singers from California Category:Female murder victims Category:20th-century American women singers Category:Phi-Dan Records artis
Revised: Deaths by strangulation in the United States Category:Homeless people Category:Murdered African-American people Category:American murder victims Category:Musicians from Fresno, California Category:Musicians from Orange County, California Category:People from Mississippi Category:People from Santa Ana, California Category:People murdered in California Category:Singers from California Category:Female murder victims Category:20th-century American women singers Category:Phi-Dan Records artists Category:20th-century African-American wom
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Original: Homeless people Category:Murdered African-American people Category:American murder victims Category:Musicians from Fresno, California Category:Musicians from Orange County, California Category:People from Mississippi Category:People from Santa Ana, California Category:People murdered in California Category:Singers from California Category:Female murder victims Category:20th-century American women singers Category:Phi-Dan Records artists Category:20th-century African-American  wom
Revised: Homeless people Category:Murdered African-American people Category:American murder victims Category:Musicians from Fresno, California Category:Musicians from Orange County, California Category:People from Mississippi Category:People from Santa Ana, California Category:People murdered in California Category:Singers from California Category:Female murder victims Category:20th-century American women singers Category:Phi-Dan Records artists Category:20th-century African-American women Category:21st-century African-American wom
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Original: GIWs, like riverine wetlands, can intercept nutrients and other pollutants from point-sources (ex. ditchs , drainage pipes) or from diffuse (non-point) sources (ex. leaching from agricultural fields).
Revised: GIWs, like riverine wetlands, can intercept nutrients and other pollutants from point-sources (ex. ditches , drainage pipes) or from diffuse (non-point) sources (ex. leaching from agricultural fields).
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Original:  Jonsson Marquet 2009 Ceramic data from a nearby archaeological site suggests they were carved slightly later, perhaps as early as AD 700.
Revised:  Ceramic data from a nearby archaeological site suggests they were carved slightly later, perhaps as early as AD 700.
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Original:  Antiquarian 1845 In 1921, Thomas Huckerby, a Methodist minister that previously wrote an article on St.
Revised:  In 1921, Thomas Huckerby, a Methodist minister that previously wrote an article on St.
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Original:  Vincent's petroglyphs, Huckerby 1914 published a small booklet about Grenada’s petroglyphs through the Museum of the American Indian in New York (now part of the Smithsonian).
Revised:  Vincent's petroglyphs, published a small booklet about Grenada’s petroglyphs through the Museum of the American Indian in New York (now part of the Smithsonian).
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Original:  Huckerby 1921 The 1921 report contains photographs and discussion of the glyphs at Mt. Rich and two other sites near Victoria, Grenada.
Revised:  The 1921 report contains photographs and discussion of the glyphs at Mt. Rich and two other sites near Victoria, Grenada.
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Original:  Since Huckerby  , several researchers have mentioned the site in their reports. e.g., Bullen 1964;
Revised:  Since Huckerby 's visit , several researchers have mentioned the site in their reports. e.g., Bullen 1964;
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Original:  Cody and Banks 1986 They observed that the photographs in Huckerby did not match the current position of the main stone, leading them to hypothesize that the rock had rolled down the hill after Huckerby’s visit.
Revised:  They observed that the photographs in Huckerby did not match the current position of the main stone, leading them to hypothesize that the rock had rolled down the hill after Huckerby’s visit.
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Original:  Cody and Banks 1986 They observed that the photographs in Huckerby did not match the current position of the main stone, leading them to hypothesize that the rock had rolled down the hill after Huckerby’s visit.
Revised:  Cody and Banks 1986 They observed that Huckerby's photographs did not match the current position of the main stone, leading them to hypothesize that the rock had rolled down the hill after Huckerby’s visit.
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Original:  Others have since noted that, given its association with the other petroglyphs and workstones in the river, the main stone likely just moved slightly out of position since Huckerby's photos , perhaps a result of people standing on top.
Revised:  Others have since noted that, given its association with the other petroglyphs and workstones in the river, the main stone likely just moved slightly out of position since 1921 , perhaps a result of people standing on top.
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Original: 162 Interpretation 250px|One of  workstones at the Mt. Rich Petroglyphs While the original meaning of the Mt. Rich engravings can only be speculated, archaeologists have made several observations about rock art in the Caribbean, generally:
Revised: 162 Interpretation 250px|One of the workstones at the Mt. Rich Petroglyphs While the original meaning of the Mt. Rich engravings can only be speculated, archaeologists have made several observations about rock art in the Caribbean, generally:
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Original:  Hayward and Cinquano 2009 they always occur near water there are often "workstones" nearby some images occur on ceramics, but most do not there are three general categories: simple faces, elaborate faces, and geometric patterns the elaborate faces often have zoomorphic (animal-like) features Most Caribbean archaeologists hold that petroglyphs were drawn by shamans,  to denote places where ancestors would gather.
Revised:  they always occur near water there are often "workstones" nearby some images occur on ceramics, but most do not there are three general categories: simple faces, elaborate faces, and geometric patterns the elaborate faces often have zoomorphic (animal-like) features Most Caribbean archaeologists hold that petroglyphs were drawn by shamans, to denote places where ancestors would gather.
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Original:  Hayward and Cinquano 2009 they always occur near water there are often "workstones" nearby some images occur on ceramics, but most do not there are three general categories: simple faces, elaborate faces, and geometric patterns the elaborate faces often have zoomorphic (animal-like) features Most Caribbean archaeologists hold that petroglyphs were drawn by shamans,  to denote places where ancestors would gather.
Revised:  Hayward and Cinquano 2009 they always occur near water there are often "workstones" nearby some images occur on ceramics, but most do not there are three general categories: simple faces, elaborate faces, and geometric patterns the elaborate faces often have zoomorphic (animal-like) features Most Caribbean archaeologists hold that petroglyphs were drawn by shamans, perhaps to denote places where ancestors would gather.
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Original:  Wild 2003 Like much of the New World, Amerindian groups in the Caribbean were animists, and sought to communicate with their ancestors.
Revised:  Like much of the New World, Amerindian groups in the Caribbean were animists, and sought to communicate with their ancestors.
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Original:  If petroglyphs are ritual spaces, then the nearby cupules (workstones ) may be mortars upon which the shamans mixed hallucinogenic concoctions to connect with the ancestors before carving (or re-carving).
Revised:  If petroglyphs are ritual spaces, then the accompanying workstones may be mortars upon which the shamans mixed hallucinogenic concoctions to connect with the ancestors before carving (or re-carving).
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Original:  Pagan-Jimenez and Carlson 2014 Visiting In 2014, a local youth group (MYCEDO) received a grant to renovate an old lookout building and turn Mt. Rich into a heritage attraction.
Revised:  Visiting In 2014, a local youth group (MYCEDO) received a grant to renovate an old lookout building and turn Mt. Rich into a heritage attraction.
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Original:  NowGrenada 2014 In 2018, they opened the building to visitors, offering information and a viewing platform for a small fee.
Revised:  In 2018, they opened the building to visitors, offering information and a viewing platform for a small fee.
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Original:  The group also conducts tours of their village and the abandoned plantation estates URL The Mt. Rich Petroglyphs are part of the Ministry of Tourism's Petroglyph Path tour, which links several of Grenada's rock art URL Footnotes References Antiquarian (1846), "Relics of the Charib Indians in the Island of Grenada," Simmond’s Colonial Magazine and Foreign Miscellany, January, v.VII.
Revised:  The group also conducts tours of their village and the abandoned plantation estates nearby. The Mt. Rich Petroglyphs are part of the Ministry of Tourism's Petroglyph Path tour, which links several of Grenada's rock art URL Footnotes References Antiquarian (1846), "Relics of the Charib Indians in the Island of Grenada," Simmond’s Colonial Magazine and Foreign Miscellany, January, v.VII.
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