wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: 2012 Zee MarathiJanmagaath 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hee Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravaahHonar Soon Mi Hya Gharachi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem he 2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga 2019 Star Pravah
Revised: 2012 Zee MarathiJanmagaath 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravaahHonar Soon Mi Hya Gharachi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem he 2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga 2019 Star Pravah
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Original: 2012 Zee MarathiJanmagaath 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hee Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravaahHonar Soon Mi Hya Gharachi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem he 2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga 2019 Star Pravah
Revised: 2012 Zee MarathiJanmagaath 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hee Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem he 2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga 2019 Star Pravah
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Original: 2012 Zee MarathiJanmagaath 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hee Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravaahHonar Soon Mi Hya Gharachi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem he 2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga 2019 Star Pravah
Revised: 2012 Zee MarathiJanmagaath 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hee Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravaahHonar Soon Mi Hya Gharachi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2007 Etv MarathiKulavadhu 
Revised: 2007 ETV MarathiKulavadhu 
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Original: No . 1 2008 
Revised: No .1 2008 
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Original: 2009 Haasya 
Revised: 2009 Hasya 
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Original: 2010 Etv MarathiTujvin 
Revised: 2010 ETV MarathiTujvin 
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Original: 2011 Zee MarathiEkaach 
Revised: 2011 Zee MarathiEkach 
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam TVKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Mala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 ETV MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 StarPlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 ETV MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 ETV MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He 2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga 2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
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Original: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga2020Zee Marathi
Revised: 2012 Saam MarathiKadambari 2012 Saam MarathiMala Sasu Havi 2012 Zee MarathiAata Tumhi Malamaal 2012 Etv MarathiKhamoshiyaan 2012 Star PlusRadha Hi Bawari 2012 Zee MarathiVivahbandhan 2013 Etv MarathiAradhana 2013 Star PravahHonar Sun Me Hya Gharchi 2013 Zee MarathiBeta Hi Chahiye 2013 Reliance Big MagicSwapnanchya Palikadale Season 2 2013 Star PravahSaavar Re 2013 Etv MarathiJulun Yeti Reshimgaathi 2013 Zee MarathiPrem He2017 Zee YuvaJeevlaga2019 Star PravahLadachi Mi Lek Ga! 2020 Zee MarathiPahile Na Mi Tula 2021
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Original:  The Acala were allies of the Lakandon Ch'ol , their immediate neighbours to the west, and the two peoples sometimes cooperated militarily.
Revised:  The Acala were allies of the Lakandon Chʼol , their immediate neighbours to the west, and the two peoples sometimes cooperated militarily.
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Original:  The Spanish and their Christianised Q'eqchi' Maya allies captured 260 Acalas, and hanged 80 of these;
Revised:  The Spanish and their Christianised Qʼeqchiʼ Maya allies captured 260 Acalas, and hanged 80 of these;
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Original:  Between 25-50 workers were murdered at the scene, along with many more wounded.
Revised:  Between 25-50 workers died at the scene, along with many more wounded.
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Original:  The meeting did not prove fruitful, and the workers ceased their labor as planned.
Revised:  The meeting did not prove fruitful, and the workers ceased their labour as planned.
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Original:  The police, rather than risk humiliation in open combat, opened fire on the striking workers, even throwing grenades.
Revised:  The police, rather than risk defeat in open combat, opened fire on the striking workers, even throwing grenades.
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Original:  The workers had nowhere to run, and were massacred in the space of about 5 minutes.
Revised:  The workers had nowhere to run, and a number were killed in the space of about 5 minutes.
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Original:  The PAIGC were acutely aware of the strike plans, and had endorsed the maneuver as an act of civil resistance against the colonial government.
Revised:  The PAIGC were aware of the strike plans, and had endorsed the maneuver as an act of civil resistance against the colonial government.
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Original:  The workers had nowhere to run, and a number were killed in the space of about 5 minutes.
Revised:  The workers had nowhere to run, and a number were killed within about 5 minutes.
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Original:  Dock workers went on strike, seeking higher pay, but  manager called the PIDE, the Portuguese state police, who fired into the crowd, killing at least 25 people.
Revised:  Dock workers went on strike, seeking higher pay, but a manager called the PIDE, the Portuguese state police, who fired into the crowd, killing at least 25 people.
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Original: By 2004  Asari had retreated from public view.
Revised: By 2004 , Asari had retreated from public view.
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Original: Dokubo-Asari (born 1964), formerly Melford Dokubo Goodhead Jr. and typically referred to simply as Asari, is a major political figure of the Ijaw ethnic group in the Niger Delta region of Nigeria.
Revised: Asari-Dokubo (born 1964), formerly Melford Dokubo Goodhead Jr. and typically referred to simply as Asari, is a major political figure of the Ijaw ethnic group in the Niger Delta region of Nigeria.
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Original: Niger Delta, is that a state in Nigeria or some political map outs with political intentions?
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Original:  References Category:Spor
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Original:  Also excluded from the Protectorate by definition in 1885 was the branch of the Tswana people living round Lake Ngami." ( from M.T. Peters (1947), The British government and the Bechuanaland Protectorate 1885 – 1895, p.1 ) The northern boundary of the protectorate was formally extended northward by the British to include Ngamiland, which was then dominated by the Tawana state, on 30 June 1890.
Revised:  Also excluded from the Protectorate by definition in 1885 was the branch of the Tswana people living round Lake Ngami." ( Peters (1947), The British government and the Bechuanaland Protectorate 1885 – 1895, p.1 ) The northern boundary of the protectorate was formally extended northward by the British to include Ngamiland, which was then dominated by the Tawana state, on 30 June 1890.
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Original:  Also excluded from the Protectorate by definition in 1885 was the branch of the Tswana people living round Lake Ngami." ( from M.T. Peters (1947), The British government and the Bechuanaland Protectorate 1885 – 1895, p.1 ) The northern boundary of the protectorate was formally extended northward by the British to include Ngamiland, which was then dominated by the Tawana state, on 30 June 1890.
Revised:  Also excluded from the Protectorate by definition in 1885 was the branch of the Tswana people living round Lake Ngami." ( from M.T. Peters (1947), p. 1 ) The northern boundary of the protectorate was formally extended northward by the British to include Ngamiland, which was then dominated by the Tawana state, on 30 June 1890.
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Original: Scottish missionary John Mackenzie (1835– 99 ), a Congregationalist of the London Missionary Society (LMS), who lived at Shoshong from 1862– 76 , "believed that the BamaNgwato and other African peoples with whom he worked were threatened by Boer freebooters encroaching on their territory from the south . "  He campaigned for the establishment of what became the Bechuanaland Protectorate, to be ruled directly from Britain.
Revised: Scottish missionary John Mackenzie (1835– 1899 ), a Congregationalist of the London Missionary Society (LMS), who lived at Shoshong from 1862– 76 , "believed that the BamaNgwato and other African peoples with whom he worked were threatened by Boer freebooters encroaching on their territory from the south . " He campaigned for the establishment of what became the Bechuanaland Protectorate, to be ruled directly from Britain.
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Original: Scottish missionary John Mackenzie (1835– 99 ), a Congregationalist of the London Missionary Society (LMS), who lived at Shoshong from 1862– 76 , "believed that the BamaNgwato and other African peoples with whom he worked were threatened by Boer freebooters encroaching on their territory from the south . "  He campaigned for the establishment of what became the Bechuanaland Protectorate, to be ruled directly from Britain.
Revised: Scottish missionary John Mackenzie (1835– 99 ), a Congregationalist of the London Missionary Society (LMS), who lived at Shoshong from 1862– 1876 , "believed that the BamaNgwato and other African peoples with whom he worked were threatened by Boer freebooters encroaching on their territory from the south . " He campaigned for the establishment of what became the Bechuanaland Protectorate, to be ruled directly from Britain.
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Original: Scottish missionary John Mackenzie (1835– 99 ), a Congregationalist of the London Missionary Society (LMS), who lived at Shoshong from 1862– 76 , "believed that the BamaNgwato and other African peoples with whom he worked were threatened by Boer freebooters encroaching on their territory from the south . "  He campaigned for the establishment of what became the Bechuanaland Protectorate, to be ruled directly from Britain.
Revised: Scottish missionary John Mackenzie (1835– 99 ), a Congregationalist of the London Missionary Society (LMS), who lived at Shoshong from 1862– 76 , "believed that the BamaNgwato and other African peoples with whom he worked were threatened by Boer freebooters encroaching on their territory from the south " He campaigned for the establishment of what became the Bechuanaland Protectorate, to be ruled directly from Britain.
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Original: Scottish missionary John Mackenzie (1835– 99 ), a Congregationalist of the London Missionary Society (LMS), who lived at Shoshong from 1862– 76 , "believed that the BamaNgwato and other African peoples with whom he worked were threatened by Boer freebooters encroaching on their territory from the south . "  He campaigned for the establishment of what became the Bechuanaland Protectorate, to be ruled directly from Britain.
Revised: Scottish missionary John Mackenzie (1835– 99 ), a Congregationalist of the London Missionary Society (LMS), who lived at Shoshong from 1862– 76 , "believed that the BamaNgwato and other African peoples with whom he worked were threatened by Boer freebooters encroaching on their territory from the south . " . He campaigned for the establishment of what became the Bechuanaland Protectorate, to be ruled directly from Britain.
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Original:  Mackenzie accompanied Warren, and Austral Africa contains a detailed account of the expedition. then In Southwest Africa, Germany's sphere of influence is demarcated thus:
Revised:  Mackenzie accompanied Warren, and Austral Africa contains a detailed account of the expedition. In Southwest Africa, Germany's sphere of influence is demarcated thus:
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Original:   The declaration of a Protectorate, apart from preserving trade corridors into the African hinterland, was being used by the British to stop the expansion of Germany which was already also present in Tanganyika, as well as Portugal in Angola and Mozambique." (T. E. Malebeswa (2020): Tribal Territories Act, indirect rule, chiefs and subjects) Contrary to what was reported at the time by Warren and others, not all chiefs affected by the protectorate were in favour of it.
Revised:  in The declaration of a Protectorate, apart from preserving trade corridors into the African hinterland, was being used by the British to stop the expansion of Germany which was already also present in Tanganyika, as well as Portugal in Angola and Mozambique." (T. E. Malebeswa (2020): Tribal Territories Act, indirect rule, chiefs and subjects) Contrary to what was reported at the time by Warren and others, not all chiefs affected by the protectorate were in favour of it.
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Original:  Sechele’ s tribe proved by no means unanimous in welcoming the Protectorate.
Revised:  Sechele' s tribe proved by no means unanimous in welcoming the Protectorate.
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Original: J. Mutero Chirenje, Chief Kgama and his times c. 1835-1923 : the story of a Southern African ruler (1978).
Revised: J. Mutero Chirenje, Chief Kgama and his times c. 1835–1923 : the story of a Southern African ruler (1978).
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Original:  Tribal opinion about the marriage basically split evenly along demographic lines - older people went with Tshekedi, the younger with Seretse.
Revised:  Tribal opinion about the marriage basically split evenly along demographic lines – older people went with Tshekedi, the younger with Seretse.
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