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Original:   At first, the shows used random images, but over time, lanternists began to place the slides in logical order, creating a narrative.
Revised:  . At first, the shows used random images, but over time, lanternists began to place the slides in logical order, creating a narrative.
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Original:  The   term stereopticon has been widely misused to name a stereoscope.
Revised:  The The term stereopticon has been widely misused to name a stereoscope.
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Original:  For circa two centuries magic lanterns had been used to project images painted on glass slides, but the Langenheim brothers seem to have been the first to incorporate the relatively new medium of photography (introduced in 1839) .
Revised:  For circa two centuries magic lanterns had been used to project painted images from glass slides, but the Langenheim brothers seem to have been the first to incorporate the relatively new medium of photography (introduced in 1839) .
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Original:  For circa two centuries magic lanterns had been used to project images painted on glass slides, but the Langenheim brothers seem to have been the first to incorporate the relatively new medium of photography (introduced in 1839) .
Revised:  For circa two centuries magic lanterns had been used to project images painted on glass slides, but the Langenheim brothers seem to have been the firsts to incorporate the relatively new medium of photography (introduced in 1839) .
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Original:  This could be done with two lanterns, but soon biunial lanterns (with two optical lens units placed one above the other) became common.
Revised:  This could be done with two lanterns, but soon biunial lanterns (with two objectives placed one above the other) became common.
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Original:  A stereopticon will not project or display stereoscopic/ three-dimensional images on cards.
Revised:  The stereopticon has not commonly been used for three-dimensional images on cards.
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Original:  Noel came to Germany in September 1947 after working for the U.S. Aid to France Commission in France .
Revised:  Noel came to Germany in September 1947 after working for American Aid to France Commission in France .
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Original:  Soon after Noel and Davis' renunciations, Arthur W. Taylor, a black American from Chicago, also renounced his citizenship at the United States Embassy in Paris, making him the third former American to become stateless that year.
Revised:  Soon after Noel and Davis' renunciations, Arthur W. Taylor, an African American from Chicago, also renounced his citizenship at the United States Embassy in Paris, making him the third former American to become stateless that year.
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Original:  She is considered to have more name recognition than her Republican and Democratic opponents.
Revised:  She was considered to have more name recognition than her Republican and Democratic opponents.
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Original:  Honkala was endorsed  many progressives and organizations including Bernie Sanders'
Revised:  Honkala was endorsed by many progressives and organizations including Bernie Sanders'
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Original:  group Our Revolution, Tim Canova's group Progress for All, environmental activist Josh Fox, progressives Rosario Dawson and Tom Morello, former Director Emeritus of Philaposh (a labor organization) Jim Moran, former Philadelphia Health Commissioner Walter Tsou, the PEOPLE Committee of the AFSCME District Council 47, Philadelphia Neighborhood Networks, the Philadelphia chapter of Socialist Alternative, and many other local clergy and leaders.
Revised:  group Our Revolution, Progress for All, environmental activist Josh Fox, progressives Rosario Dawson and Tom Morello, former Director Emeritus of Philaposh (a labor organization) Jim Moran, former Philadelphia Health Commissioner Walter Tsou, the PEOPLE Committee of the AFSCME District Council 47, Philadelphia Neighborhood Networks, the Philadelphia chapter of Socialist Alternative, and many other local clergy and leaders.
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Original:  group Our Revolution, Tim Canova's group Progress for All, environmental activist Josh Fox, progressives Rosario Dawson and Tom Morello, former Director Emeritus of Philaposh (a labor organization) Jim Moran, former Philadelphia Health Commissioner Walter Tsou, the PEOPLE Committee of the AFSCME District Council 47, Philadelphia Neighborhood Networks, the Philadelphia chapter of Socialist Alternative, and many other local clergy and leaders.
Revised:  group Our Revolution, Tim Canova's group Progress for All, environmental activist Josh Fox, progressive entertainers Rosario Dawson and Tom Morello, former Director Emeritus of Philaposh (a labor organization) Jim Moran, former Philadelphia Health Commissioner Walter Tsou, the PEOPLE Committee of the AFSCME District Council 47, Philadelphia Neighborhood Networks, the Philadelphia chapter of Socialist Alternative, and many other local clergy and leaders.
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Original:  group Our Revolution, Tim Canova's group Progress for All, environmental activist Josh Fox, progressives Rosario Dawson and Tom Morello, former Director Emeritus of Philaposh (a labor organization) Jim Moran, former Philadelphia Health Commissioner Walter Tsou, the PEOPLE Committee of the AFSCME District Council 47, Philadelphia Neighborhood Networks, the Philadelphia chapter of Socialist Alternative, and many other local clergy and leaders.
Revised:  group Our Revolution, Tim Canova's group Progress for All, environmental activist Josh Fox, progressives Rosario Dawson and Tom Morello, former Director Emeritus of Philaposh (a labor organization) Jim Moran, former Philadelphia Health Commissioner Walter Tsou, the PEOPLE Committee of the AFSCME District Council 47, Philadelphia Neighborhood Networks, the Philadelphia chapter of Socialist Alternative, and other local clergy and leaders.
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Original:  In March 2017, Honkala lost a special election to represent the 197th district in the Pennsylvania House of Representatives to Democratic write-in Emilio Vazquez when the votes were counted .
Revised:  In March 2017, Honkala lost to Democratic write-in Emilio Vazquez when the votes were counted .
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Original:  In March 2017, Honkala lost a special election to represent the 197th district in the Pennsylvania House of Representatives to Democratic write-in Emilio Vazquez when the votes were counted .
Revised:  In March 2017, Honkala lost a special election to represent the 197th district in the Pennsylvania House of Representatives to Democratic write-in Emilio Vazquez .
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Original:  However, this election is under investigation by the Philadelphia District Attorney's Office and the Pennsylvania Attorney General.
Revised:  However, this election went under investigation by the Philadelphia District Attorney's Office and the Pennsylvania Attorney General.
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Original: 2017 Pennsylvania House of Representatives campaign On January 31, 2017 Honkala announced she was running for Representative of Pennsylvania House District 197 in the March 21 special election to replace Leslie Acosta, who was the second state representative in the 197th District to resign on federal fraud charges.
Revised: 2017 Pennsylvania House of Representatives campaign On January 31, 2017 Honkala announced she was running for the Pennsylvania House of Representatives in the March 21 special election to replace Leslie Acosta, who was the second state representative in the 197th District to resign on federal fraud charges.
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Original: 2017 Pennsylvania House of Representatives campaign On January 31, 2017 Honkala announced she was running for Representative of Pennsylvania House District 197 in the March 21 special election to replace Leslie Acosta, who was the second state representative in the 197th District to resign on federal fraud charges.
Revised: 2017 Pennsylvania House of Representatives campaign On January 31, 2017 Honkala announced she was running for Representative of Pennsylvania House District 197 in the March 21 special election to replace Leslie Acosta, who was the second state representative for the 197th District to resign on federal fraud charges.
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Original: 2017 Pennsylvania House of Representatives campaign On January 31, 2017 Honkala announced she was running for Representative of Pennsylvania House District 197 in the March 21 special election to replace Leslie Acosta, who was the second state representative in the 197th District to resign on federal fraud charges.
Revised: 2017 Pennsylvania House of Representatives campaign On January 31, 2017 Honkala announced she was running for Representative of Pennsylvania House District 197 in the March 21 special election to replace Leslie Acosta, who was the second state representative in the 197th legislative district to resign on federal fraud charges.
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Original: 48.082007All-Africa GamesAlgiers, Algeria14th (h)1500 m3:46.672009World ChampionshipsBerlin, Germany41st (h)1500 m3:46.452010African ChampionshipsNairobi, Kenya9th1500 m3:40.252012African ChampionshipsPorto Novo, Benin5th1500 m3:38.272013World ChampionshipsMoscow, Russia3rd1500 m3:36.832014Commonwealth GamesGlasgow, United Kingdom4th1500 m3:39.65African ChampionshipsMarrakech, Morocco7th1500 m3:44.402015World Championships Beijing, China8th (sf)1500 m3: 36.59
Revised: 48.082007All-Africa GamesAlgiers, Algeria14th (h)1500 m3:46.672009World ChampionshipsBerlin, Germany41st (h)1500 m3:46.452010African ChampionshipsNairobi, Kenya9th1500 m3:40.252012African ChampionshipsPorto Novo, Benin5th1500 m3:38.272013World ChampionshipsMoscow, Russia3rd1500 m3:36.832014Commonwealth GamesGlasgow, United Kingdom4th1500 m3:39.65African ChampionshipsMarrakech, Morocco7th1500 m3:44.402015World Championships Beijing, China8th (sf)1500 m3: 36.592016African ChampionshipsDurban, South Africa9th1500 m3:45.26
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Original: Living people Category:South African male middle-distance runners Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2004 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic athletes of South Africa Category:World Athletics Championships medalists Category:Afrikaner people Category:Sportspeople from Bloemfontein Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Athletics Championships athletes for South Africa Category:South African Athletics Championships winne
Revised: Living people Category:South African male middle-distance runners Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2004 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic athletes of South Africa Category:World Athletics Championships medalists Category:Afrikaner people Category:Sportspeople from Bloemfontein Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Athletics Championships athletes for South Africa Category:South African Athletics Championships winners Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Afri
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Original: Olympic athletes of South Africa Category:World Athletics Championships medalists Category:Afrikaner people Category:Sportspeople from Bloemfontein Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Athletics Championships athletes for South Africa Category:South African Athletics Championships winners Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2007 All-Africa Gam
Revised: Olympic athletes of South Africa Category:World Athletics Championships medalists Category:Afrikaner people Category:Sportspeople from Bloemfontein Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Athletics Championships athletes for South Africa Category:South African Athletics Championships winners Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2007 All-Africa Games Category:African Games competitors for South Afri
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Original: In 1867, about 15 years after a more disastrous Second Anglo-Burmese War (1852), and about a year after a serious rebellion that killed Crown Prince Kanaung Mintha , a shaken King Mindon ordered another committee of scholars to update Hmannan.
Revised: In 1867, about 15 years after an even more disastrous Second Anglo-Burmese War (1852), and about a year after a serious rebellion that killed Crown Prince Kanaung Mintha , a shaken King Mindon ordered another committee of scholars to update Hmannan.
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Original: In 1867, about 15 years after a more disastrous Second Anglo-Burmese War (1852), and about a year after a serious rebellion that killed Crown Prince Kanaung Mintha , a shaken King Mindon ordered another committee of scholars to update Hmannan.
Revised: In 1867, about 15 years after a more disastrous Second Anglo-Burmese War (1852), and about a year after a serious rebellion that killed Crown Prince Kanaung Mintha . A shaken King Mindon ordered another committee of scholars to update Hmannan.
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Original: In 1867, about 15 years after a more disastrous Second Anglo-Burmese War (1852), and about a year after a serious rebellion that killed Crown Prince Kanaung Mintha , a shaken King Mindon ordered another committee of scholars to update Hmannan.
Revised: In 1867, about 15 years after a more disastrous Second Anglo-Burmese War (1852), and about a year after a serious rebellion that killed Crown Prince Kanaung Mintha , a shaken King Mindon commissioned another committee of scholars to update Hmannan.
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Original:  Shree Kutch Gurjar Kshatriya Samaj : A brief history & glory of our fore-fathers by Raja Pawan Jethwa (2007 : Calcutta).pp :19. Jagmal Bhima & Karsan Bhima - Railway Contracts & Rai Sahib Koonvarji Karsan Rathor - a brief life-sketch.
Revised:  Kutch Gurjar Kshatriya Samaj : A brief history & glory of our fore-fathers by Raja Pawan Jethwa (2007 : Calcutta).pp :19. Jagmal Bhima & Karsan Bhima - Railway Contracts & Rai Sahib Koonvarji Karsan Rathor - a brief life-sketch.
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Original:  Shree Kutch Gurjar Kshatriya Samaj : A brief history & glory of our fore-fathers by Raja Pawan Jethwa (2007 : Calcutta).pp :19. Jagmal Bhima & Karsan Bhima - Railway Contracts & Rai Sahib Koonvarji Karsan Rathor - a brief life-sketch.
Revised:  Shree Kutch Gurjar Kshatriya Samaj : A brief history & glory by Raja Pawan Jethwa (2007 : Calcutta).pp :19. Jagmal Bhima & Karsan Bhima - Railway Contracts & Rai Sahib Koonvarji Karsan Rathor - a brief life-sketch.
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Original: Kutch Tari Asmita (1926) pp : 267 In his ancestral village  Madhapar in Kutch, the huge artificial pond made by his uncle, Jagmal Bhima Rathor in 1900, is today known as Jagasagar Lake, named after its builder.
Revised: Kutch Tari Asmita (1926) pp : 267 In his ancestral village at Madhapar in Kutch, the huge artificial pond made by his uncle, Jagmal Bhima Rathor in 1900, is today known as Jagasagar Lake, named after its builder.
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Original:  In 1897 they were involved in laying the lines and building the bridge over Dhelang River in Khurda Road to Puri section for Bengal Nagpur Railway, in 1902 works in Gondia - Jabalpur section, in 1906 works in Gondia - Nagbhir section and in 1910 the Tatanagar - Gorumahsini section with other Mistri railway contractors of Kutch.
Revised:  In 1897 they were involved in laying the lines and building the bridge over Dhelang River in Khurda Road to Puri section for Bengal Nagpur Railway, in 1902 works in Gondia - Jabalpur section, in 1906 works in Gondia - Nagbhid section and in 1910 the Tatanagar - Gorumahsini section with other Mistri railway contractors of Kutch.
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Original:  Proceedings of the Indian Science Congress, Volume 49, 1962 . pp: 15 Looking into plight of poor fisher-mans, he for many years, did not took storage charges from them.
Revised:  Proceedings of the Indian Science Congress, Volume 49, 1962 . pp: 15 Looking into plight of poor fisher-mans, he for many years, did not take storage charges from them.
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Original:  Complied by Dharshi Jethalal Taunk (1999) It is a diary of railway contacts noted by Nanji Govindji Tank during his lifetime with last entry in 1954 later published as book with recorded documents.
Revised:  Compiled by Dharshi Jethalal Taunk (1999) It is a diary of railway contacts noted by Nanji Govindji Tank during his lifetime with last entry in 1954 later published as book with recorded documents.
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Original:  She was born in vaikam and was also a member of UPSC civil service interview board  Earlier she was the Vice Chancellor of Mahatma Gandhi University in Kerala.
Revised:  She was born in Vaikam and was also a member of UPSC civil service interview board Earlier she was the Vice Chancellor of Mahatma Gandhi University in Kerala.
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Original:  She was born in vaikam and was also a member of UPSC civil service interview board  Earlier she was the Vice Chancellor of Mahatma Gandhi University in Kerala.
Revised:  She was born in vaikam and was also a member of UPSC civil service interview board . Earlier she was the Vice Chancellor of Mahatma Gandhi University in Kerala.
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Original:  She was also the first woman to become the Vice Chancellor of a University in Kerala when she was appointed to Mahatma Gandhi University.
Revised:  She was also the first woman to become the Vice Chancellor of a university in Kerala when she was appointed to Mahatma Gandhi University.
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Original:  Teresa's College alumni Category:University of Kerala faculty Category:People from Kasaragod district Category:Mahatma Gandhi University, Kerala faculty Category:Indian women educational theorists Category:Educators from Kerala Category:Women educators from Kerala Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:20th-century women educato
Revised:  Teresa's College alumni Category:University of Kerala faculty Category:People from Kasaragod district Category:Mahatma Gandhi University, Kerala faculty Category:Indian women educational theorists Category:Educators from Kerala Category:Women educators from Kerala Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:20th-century women educators Category:20th-century Indian wom
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Original: Amritlal Vegad (1928 –
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Original:  6 July 2018) was an Indian writer and poet who wrote in Gujarati and Hindi from Jabalpur . Category:
Revised:  6 July 2018) was a noted Gujarati and Hindi from Jabalpur . Category:
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Original:  Visva-Bharati University alumni Category:Indian male painters Category:Gujarati-language writers Category:Writers from Madhya Pradesh Category:Hindi-language writers Category:Gujarati people Category:People from Kutch district Category:People from Jabalpur Category:  Indian environmentalists Category:Recipients of the Sahitya Akademi Award in Gujarati Category:20th-century Indian painters Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian male writers Category:Indian art write
Revised:  Visva-Bharati University alumni Category:Indian male painters Category:Gujarati-language writers Category:Writers from Madhya Pradesh Category:Hindi-language writers Category:Gujarati people Category:People from Kutch district Category:People from Jabalpur Category: Living people Category: Indian environmentalists Category:Recipients of the Sahitya Akademi Award in Gujarati Category:20th-century Indian painters Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian male writers Category:Indian art write
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Original: Amritlal Vegad is also working as an environmental activist, raising the issues of pollution of rivers like Narmada and others in State of Madhya Pradesh.
Revised: Amritlal Vegad was also noted for his works as an environmental activist, raising the issues of pollution of rivers like Narmada and others in State of Madhya Pradesh.
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Original:  He is at present President of Narmada Samagra, an institution working against pollution of rivers and improving the facilities of public toilet and baths, along bathing ghats of rivers, in an effort to improve sanitation and pollution or river banks and river waters.
Revised:  He was the President of Narmada Samagra, an institution working against pollution of rivers and improving the facilities of public toilet and baths, along bathing ghats of rivers, in an effort to improve sanitation and pollution or river banks and river waters.
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Original: Indian male painters Category:Gujarati-language writers Category:Writers from Madhya Pradesh Category:Hindi-language writers Category:Gujarati people Category:People from Kutch district Category:People from Jabalpur Category: Living people Category: Indian environmentalists Category:Recipients of the Sahitya Akademi Award in Gujarati Category:20th-century Indian painters Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian male writers Category:Indian art writers Category:2018 deat
Revised: Indian male painters Category:Gujarati-language writers Category:Writers from Madhya Pradesh Category:Hindi-language writers Category:Gujarati people Category:People from Kutch district Category:People from Jabalpur Category: Indian environmentalists Category:Recipients of the Sahitya Akademi Award in Gujarati Category:20th-century Indian painters Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian male writers Category:Indian art writers Category:2018 deat
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Original: Indian male painters Category:Gujarati-language writers Category:Writers from Madhya Pradesh Category:Hindi-language writers Category:Gujarati people Category:People from Kutch district Category:People from Jabalpur Category: Living people Category: Indian environmentalists Category:Recipients of the Sahitya Akademi Award in Gujarati Category:20th-century Indian painters Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian male writers Category:Indian art writers Category:2018 deat
Revised: Indian male painters Category:Gujarati-language writers Category:Writers from Madhya Pradesh Category:Hindi-language writers Category:Gujarati people Category:People from Kutch district Category:People from Jabalpur Category: Living people Category: Indian environmentalists Category:Recipients of the Sahitya Akademi Award in Gujarati Category:20th-century Indian painters Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian male writers Category:Indian art writer
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Original: Visva-Bharati University alumni Category:Indian male painters Category:Gujarati-language writers Category:Writers from Madhya Pradesh Category:Hindi-language writers Category:Gujarati people Category:People from Kutch district Category:People from Jabalpur Category:Indian environmentalists Category:Recipients of the Sahitya Akademi Award in Gujarati Category:20th-century Indian painters Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian male writers Category:Indian art writer
Revised: Visva-Bharati University alumni Category:Indian male painters Category:Gujarati-language writers Category:Writers from Madhya Pradesh Category:Hindi-language writers Category:Gujarati people Category:People from Kutch district Category:People from Jabalpur Category:Indian environmentalists Category:Recipients of the Sahitya Akademi Award in Gujarati Category:20th-century Indian painters Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian male writers Category:Indian art write
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Original:  He was trained in water colours but he paints also in oil colours.
Revised:  He was trained in water colours but he painted also in oil colours.
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