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Original:  It is held in Okahandja in central Namibia annually on August 26, the day and place Herero chief Samuel Maharero's body was reburied alongside his ancestors in 1923.1923 in Namibia KlausDierks.com Accordingly, the celebrations last three days long, although they usually begin on the Sunday nearest the 23rd.
Revised:  It is held in Okahandja in central Namibia annually on August 26, the day and place Herero chief Samuel Maharero's body was reburied alongside his ancestors in 1923.1923 in Namibia KlausDierks.com Accordingly, the celebrations last three days long, although they usually begin on the Sunday nearest August 23.
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Original:  Hundreds of people annually gather to watch leaders such as Hifikepunye Pohamba, Sam Nujoma and Nahas Angula officially commemorate veterans of the People's Liberation Army of Namibia (PLAN).
Revised:  Hundreds of people annually gather to watch leaders officially commemorate veterans of the People's Liberation Army of Namibia (PLAN).
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Original:   Education He earned  M.A. and Ph.
Revised:  Education He earned his M.A. and Ph.
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Original: References Ettore Selli,  Labirinti Vegetali, la guida completa alle architetture verdi dei cinque continenti  , Ed.
Revised: References Ettore Selli, " Labirinti Vegetali, la guida completa alle architetture verdi dei cinque continenti , Ed.
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Original: References Ettore Selli,  Labirinti Vegetali, la guida completa alle architetture verdi dei cinque continenti  , Ed.
Revised: References Ettore Selli, Labirinti Vegetali, la guida completa alle architetture verdi dei cinque continenti " , Ed.
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Original:   Hermann Kern, Through the Labyrinth, ed.
Revised:  ISBN 9788833642222 Hermann Kern, Through the Labyrinth, ed.
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Original:  An estimated 15 million e-valentines were sent in 2010.
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Original:  This shift from security to defence requires a strong emphasis on intelligence, surveillance and reconnaissance, and the integration of staff activities to include intelligence, operations, communications, and planning.
Revised:  This shift from security to defence requires a strong emphasis on intelligence, and reconnaissance, and the integration of staff activities to include intelligence, operations, communications, and planning.
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Original:  interdicting and disrupting an attack or a threat's preparation to attack, either pre-emptively or in self-defence.
Revised:  interdicting , disrupting or deterring an attack or a threat's preparation to attack, either pre-emptively or in self-defence.
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Original:  Hence, offensive cyber capabilities may be developed in collaboration with industry, or facilitated by private sector but operations are  led by nation states.
Revised:  Hence, offensive cyber capabilities may be developed in collaboration with industry, or facilitated by private sector but operations are often led by nation states.
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Original:  It represents the thermocline between purely offensive and defensive action;
Revised:  Proactive cyber defence can be understood as options between offensive and defensive action;
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Original:  It represents the thermocline between purely offensive and defensive action;
Revised:  It represents the thermocline between purely offensive and defensive measures. It includes
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Original:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents , provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battlespace.
Revised:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improve information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents , provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battlespace.
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Original:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents , provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battlespace.
Revised:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents and to provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battlespace.
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Original:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents , provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battlespace.
Revised:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents , provide strike options as well as to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battlespace.
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Original:  Proactive cyber defence differs from active defence in that it is pre-emptive (not waiting for an attack to occur).
Revised:  Proactive cyber defence differs from active defence , meaning that it is pre-emptive (not waiting for an attack to occur).
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Original:  The distinction between active cyber defence and offensive cyber operations (OCO) is that the later requires legislative exceptions or executive prerogative to undertake.
Revised:  The distinction between active cyber defence and offensive cyber operations (OCO) is that the later requires legislative exceptions to undertake.
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Original:  Hence, offensive cyber capabilities may be developed in collaboration with industry , or facilitated by private sector but operations are often led by nation states.
Revised:  Hence, offensive cyber capabilities may be developed in collaboration with industry and facilitated by private sector but operations are often led by nation states.
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Original:  Hence, offensive cyber capabilities may be developed in collaboration with industry , or facilitated by private sector but operations are often led by nation states.
Revised:  Hence, offensive cyber capabilities may be developed in collaboration with industry , or facilitated by private sector . But, these operations are often led by nation states.
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Original:  Cyber threat hunting is the process of proactively and iteratively searching through networks to detect and isolate advanced threats that evade existing security solutions.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Offensive, proactive cyber activities and active cyber defence facilitate anticipatory threat reduction while informing protection, detection and incident response given its ability to engage the adversary at distance and time.
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Original:  The distinction between cyber defence, active cyber defence, proactive cyber defence and offensive cyber operations has been influenced by doctrine, pragmatics of technology or tradecraft and legal thresholds.
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Original:  Active cyber defence decisively engages the adversary and includes hunt and adversarial pursuit activities.
Revised:  Active cyber defence decisively engages the adversary and includes adversarial pursuit activities.
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Original:  Military science then and now considers defense as the science-art of thwarting an attack.
Revised:  Military science considers defence as the science-art of thwarting an attack.
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Original:  Proactive defense has moved beyond theory .
Revised:  Proactive defence has moved beyond theory .
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Original:   independently managed networks linked together through the lingua franca of the Internet, the Internet Protocol (IP) .
Revised:  it means independently managed networks linked together through the lingua franca of the Internet, the Internet Protocol (IP) .
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Original:   independently managed networks linked together through the lingua franca of the Internet, the Internet Protocol (IP) .
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Original:  The National Strategy to Secure Cyberspace  was published in February 2003 to outline an initial framework for both organizing and prioritizing efforts to secure the cyberspace.
Revised:  The National Strategy to Secure Cyberspace was published in February 2003 outlining theinitial framework for both organizing and prioritizing efforts to secure the cyberspace.
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Original:  The notion of "proactive defense " has a rich history.
Revised:  The notion of "proactive defence " has a rich history.
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Original:  Much of the current doctrine related to proactive cyber defense was fully developed by 1995.
Revised:  Much of the current doctrine related to proactive cyber defence was fully developed by 1995.
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Original:  The hype-cycle of discussion reached its peak in 1994.
Revised:  1994.
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Original:  Present-day proactive cyber defense strategy was conceived within the context of the rich discussion that preceded it, existing doctrine and real proactive cyber defense programs that have evolved globally over the past decade.
Revised:  Present-day proactive cyber defence strategy was conceived within the context of the rich discussion that preceded it, existing doctrine and real proactive cyber defense programs that have evolved globally over the past decade.
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Original:  Present-day proactive cyber defense strategy was conceived within the context of the rich discussion that preceded it, existing doctrine and real proactive cyber defense programs that have evolved globally over the past decade.
Revised:  Present-day proactive cyber defense strategy was conceived within the context of the rich discussion that preceded it, existing doctrine and real proactive cyber defence programs that have evolved globally over the past decade.
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Original:  Similarly, Deterrence and diplomacy are required in the right dosage to dissuade purposeful interference with the national critical cyber infrastructures in influence in the democratic process by foreign states.
Revised:  Similarly, deterrence and diplomacy are required in the right dosage to dissuade purposeful interference with the national critical cyber infrastructures in influence in the democratic process by foreign states.
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Original:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents, provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battle space.
Revised:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents, provide strike options to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battle space.
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Original:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents, provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battle space.
Revised:  The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents, provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real as well as virtual battle space.
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Original:  On the other hand, we can use PTT to explain the security perceptions of the United States and China, as a rising country, in terms of their use of pre-emptive cyber defense policies.
Revised:  On the other hand, we can still use the PTT to explain the security perceptions of the United States and China, as a rising country, in terms of their use of pre-emptive cyber defense policies.
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Original:  On the other hand, we can use PTT to explain the security perceptions of the United States and China, as a rising country, in terms of their use of pre-emptive cyber defense policies.
Revised:  On the other hand, we can use PTT to explain the security perceptions of the United States and China, as a rising country, in terms of their use of pre-emptive cyber defence policies.
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Original:  Many scholars have already begun to examine the likelihood of cyberwar between these countries and examined the relevance of  PTT and other similar international relations theories.
Revised:  Many scholars have already begun to examine the likelihood of cyber war between these countries and examined the relevance of PTT and other similar international relations theories.
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Original:  Many scholars have already begun to examine the likelihood of cyberwar between these countries and examined the relevance of  PTT and other similar international relations theories.
Revised:  Many scholars have already begun to examine the likelihood of cyberwar between these countries and examined the relevance of the PTT and other similar international relations theories.
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Original: Padma Bhushan (Dr.) Guru Ammannur Madhava Chakyar (May 13, 1917 – July 2, 2008) was a master of Kutiyattam, the classical Sanskrit theatrical form indigenous to Kerala.
Revised:  (Dr.) Guru Ammannur Madhava Chakyar (May 13, 1917 – July 2, 2008) was a master of Kutiyattam, the classical Sanskrit theatrical form indigenous to Kerala.
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Original: 300px|Ammannur Madhava Chakyar (Dr.) Guru Ammannur Madhava Chakyar (May 13, 1917 – July 2, 2008) was a master of Kutiyattam, the classical Sanskrit theatrical form indigenous to Kerala.
Revised:  (Dr.) Guru Ammannur Madhava Chakyar (May 13, 1917 – July 2, 2008) was a master of Kutiyattam, the classical Sanskrit theatrical form indigenous to Kerala.
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Original: Biography Family Ammannur Madhava Chakyar was born into the Ammannur Chakyar family to Sreedevi Illodamma and Vellarapilli Madassi Manakkal Parameswaran Nambuthiri on 13 May 1917.
Revised:  Family Ammannur Madhava Chakyar was born into the Ammannur Chakyar family to Sreedevi Illodamma and Vellarapilli Madassi Manakkal Parameswaran Nambuthiri on 13 May 1917.
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Original:  Later career%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the 1980s, he became one of the first Kutiyattam performers to present his art to an international audience.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the 1980s, he became one of the first Kutiyattam performers to present his art to an international audience.
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Original:  He was aged 91.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Repertory Highlights (major characters followed by the plays in which they appear) 250px|Ammannur Madhava Chakyar 300px|Ammannur Madhava Chakyar Bali–Balivadham Ravana–Thoranayudham, Asokavanikankam, Hanumaddutam, Jatayuvadham Surpanakha–Surpanakhangam Hanuman–Thoranayudham, Ankuliyankam Bhima, Vidyadhara–Kalyanasaugandhikam Positions Held Kulapati at the Ammannur Chachu Chakyar Smaraka Gurukulam, which he co-founded with G.Venu.
Revised:  He was aged 91.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Positions Held Kulapati at the Ammannur Chachu Chakyar Smaraka Gurukulam, which he co-founded with G.Venu.
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Original:  Cheruthuruthy, 1981–82%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Well-Known Pupils Moozhikkulam Kochukuttan Chakyar Ammannur Kuttam Chakyar G.Venu Usha Nangiar Margi Madhu Ammannur Rajaneesh Chakyar Sooraj Nambiar Pothiyil Renjith Chakyar Kapila Aparna Nangiar T. R. Saritha Margi Raman Margi Sajeev Narayanan Potiyil Narayanan Nirmala Paniker Tomoe Tara Irino Rathy Nangiar%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Honors/Awards Padma Bhushan from Government of India–2003 P.S.
Revised:  Cheruthuruthy, 1981–82%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Moozhikkulam Kochukuttan Chakyar Ammannur Kuttam Chakyar G.Venu Usha Nangiar Margi Madhu Ammannur Rajaneesh Chakyar Sooraj Nambiar Pothiyil Renjith Chakyar Kapila Aparna Nangiar T. R. Saritha Margi Raman Margi Sajeev Narayanan Potiyil Narayanan Nirmala Paniker Tomoe Tara Irino Rathy Nangiar%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Honors/Awards Padma Bhushan from Government of India–2003 P.S.
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Original:  Cheruthuruthy, 1981–82%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Well-Known Pupils Moozhikkulam Kochukuttan Chakyar Ammannur Kuttam Chakyar G.Venu Usha Nangiar Margi Madhu Ammannur Rajaneesh Chakyar Sooraj Nambiar Pothiyil Renjith Chakyar Kapila Aparna Nangiar T. R. Saritha Margi Raman Margi Sajeev Narayanan Potiyil Narayanan Nirmala Paniker Tomoe Tara Irino Rathy Nangiar%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Honors/Awards Padma Bhushan from Government of India–2003 P.S.
Revised:  Cheruthuruthy, 1981–82%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Well-Known Pupils %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Honors/Awards Padma Bhushan from Government of India–2003 P.S.
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Original:  from The International Centre for Kutiyattam, Thripunithura–1994 Sree Guruvayoorappan Samman (prize) from Guruvayur Temple–1992 Kalidas Samman from the Government of Madhya Pradesh–1992 Fellowship from Kerala Kalamandalam–1988 ‘Natya Kala Nidhi’, a title from the Cochin Devaswom Board–1987 Padmashree from the Government of India–1982 Sangeet Natak Akademi Award - 1979 Other sources   Into the world of Kutiyattam : with the legendary Ammannur Madhava Chakyar by G. Venu (1945- );
Revised:  from The International Centre for Kutiyattam, Thripunithura–1994 Sree Guruvayoorappan Samman (prize) from Guruvayur Temple–1992 Kalidas Samman from the Government of Madhya Pradesh–1992 Fellowship from Kerala Kalamandalam–1988 ‘Natya Kala Nidhi’, a title from the Cochin Devaswom Board–1987 Padmashree from the Government of India–1982 Sangeet Natak Akademi Award - 1979 Other sources References Into the world of Kutiyattam : with the legendary Ammannur Madhava Chakyar by G. Venu (1945- );
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Original:  See also Moozhikkulam Kochukuttan Chakyar Mani Madhava Chakyar References
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Original:  See also Moozhikkulam Kochukuttan Chakyar Mani Madhava Chakyar References
Revised:  See also Moozhikkulam Kochukuttan Chakyar Mani Madhava Chakyar 
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Original:  She also returns to Philadelphia with roommate Will Gilbert to resolve her legal troubles during the run of her season, and is picked up to record several songs of her own, as well as perform live with Alex Band, formerly of the band The Calling.
Revised:  She also returns to Philadelphia with roommate Will Gilbert to resolve her legal troubles during that season, and is picked up to record several songs of her own, as well as perform live with Alex Band, formerly of the band The Calling.
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Original:  Washing Tracks, Maintenance Outside, Wadsworth Atheneum, Hartford, 1973 ), thus criticizing the museum as an institution that sets the rules for artists and viewers.
Revised:  Washing Tracks, Maintenance Outside, Wadsworth Atheneum, Hartford, 1972 ), thus criticizing the museum as an institution that sets the rules for artists and viewers.
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Original: Kwon, p. 13 When the public debate over Tilted Arc (1981) resulted in its removal in 1989, its author Richard Serra reacted with what can be considered a definition of site-specific art: "To move the work is to destroy the work.
Revised: Kwon, p. 13 When the publi debate over Tilted Arc (1981) resulted in its removal in 1989, its author Richard Serra reacted with what can be considered a definition of site-specific art: "To move the work is to destroy the work.
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Original:  Washing Tracks, Maintenance Outside, Wadsworth Atheneum, Hartford, 1972 ), thus criticizing the museum as an institution that sets the rules for artists and viewers.
Revised:  Washing Tracks, Maintenance Outside, Wadsworth Atheneum, Hartford, 1973 ), thus criticizing the museum as an institution that sets the rules for artists and viewers.
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Original: Kwon, p. 13 When the publi debate over Tilted Arc (1981) resulted in its removal in 1989, its author Richard Serra reacted with what can be considered a definition of site-specific art: "To move the work is to destroy the work.
Revised: Kwon, p. 13 When the public debate over Tilted Arc (1981) resulted in its removal in 1989, its author Richard Serra reacted with what can be considered a definition of site-specific art: "To move the work is to destroy the work.
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Original: JPG|Dan Flavin, Site-specific installation, 1996, Menil Collection , Houston TX, USA]] [[Image:Place du 6-Décembre-1989, Montreal.jpg|Nef pour quatorze reines by Rose-Marie Goulet, a memorial to the École Polytechnique Massacre, featuring sculptural elements integrated into a specially landscaped site, Montreal, Canada]] Site-specific art is artwork created to exist in a certain place.
Revised: JPG|Dan Flavin, Site-specific installation, poooopil Collection , Houston TX, USA]] [[Image:Place du 6-Décembre-1989, Montreal.jpg|Nef pour quatorze reines by Rose-Marie Goulet, a memorial to the École Polytechnique Massacre, featuring sculptural elements integrated into a specially landscaped site, Montreal, Canada]] Site-specific art is artwork created to exist in a certain place.
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Original:  The warrant, authorized by  Gaby Dumas, a justice of the peace, gave Laval police the green light to use a dynamic entry – meant to surprise the person being investigated – to carry out their search for evidence.
Revised:  The warrant, authorized by justice Gaby Dumas, a justice of the peace, gave Laval police the green light to use a dynamic entry – meant to surprise the person being investigated – to carry out their search for evidence.
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Original:  The warrant, authorized by  Gaby Dumas, a justice of the peace, gave Laval police the green light to use a dynamic entry – meant to surprise the person being investigated – to carry out their search for evidence.
Revised:  The warrant, authorized by Gaby Dumas, allowed Laval police to use forced entry – meant to surprise the person being investigated – to carry out their search for evidence.
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Original:  The warrant was executed before dawn and with dynamic (forced) entry.
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Original:  he rushed to his .357 Magnum revolver and shot at the presumed invaders.
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Original:  The older son rushed and called 9-1-1 who informed him to stay calm .
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Original:  The older son rushed and called 9-1-1 who informed him to stay calm .
Revised:  The older son rushed and called 9-1-1 , and was directed to stay put .
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Original:  Witnesses who testified for Mr. Parasiris claimed that Basil was a man of great character, who lived an honest and peaceful life .
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Original:  Witnesses who testified for Mr. Parasiris claimed that Basil was a man of great character, who lived an honest and peaceful life .
Revised:  Witnesses who testified for Mr. Parasiris claimed that Basil was a man of great character, who lived an honest and peaceful man .
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Original:  Never before has a suspect in Canada believed to have been released on bail for the charge of first degree murder.
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Original:  After testimony from witnesses and from Basil Parasiris, Justice Boilard came to the decision of allowing Basil to be given bail- a first for first degree murder in Canada according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
Revised:  After testimony from witnesses and from Basil Parasiris, Justice Boilard came to the decision of allowing Basil to be given bail. Never before has a suspect in Canada believed to have been released on bail for the charge of first degree murder in Canada according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
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