wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Muhammad Saleh became the leader of the padri movement in Tambusai and was called by locals, tuanku tambusai, meaning, chief of tambusai .
Revised:  Muhammad Saleh became the leader of the padri movement in Tambusai and was granted the title by Tuanku Tambusai, meaning, Lord of Tambusai, by the Sultan .
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Original:  The battle was a key event in the jihad in which the Kingdom of Fouta Djallon was created.
Revised:  The battle was a key event in the jihad in which the Imamate of Futa Jallon was created.
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Original: Talansan was the location of a battle in Fouta Djallon , in what is now Guinea, in which Muslim forces were victorious.
Revised: Talansan was the location of a battle in Futa Jallon , in what is now Guinea, in which Muslim forces were victorious.
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Original:  By 2006, Wolf Child was a third-year native studies and political science student at the University of Lethbridge, where he was elected an Arts and Sciences representative to the University of Lethbridge Students' Union in March 2006.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In proceedings of the Senate of Canada Standing Committee on Aboriginal Peoples on 21 February 2001, Senator Landon Pearson cited Wolf Child's work as a youth member of the Canadian delegation to a preliminary meeting working towards the United Nations Special Session on Children.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% les on 21 February 2001, Senator Landon Pearson cited Wolf Child's work as a youth member of the Canadian delegation to a preliminary meeting working towards the United Nations Special Session on Children.
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Original:  Retrieved from URL Operating rooms are typically kept below 23 °C ( 73.4 °F  ) & room temperature is the most critical factor in influencing heat loss.
Revised:  Retrieved from URL Operating rooms are typically kept below 73.4 °F ) & room temperature is the most critical factor in influencing heat loss.
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Original:  There are only two old-style operating theaters left, both of which are preserved as part of museums.
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Original:  Surgeons wear multiple layers (surgical gowns, lead aprons) and may perspire into an incision if not kept cool and may decrease concentration and increase  errors.
Revised:  Surgeons wear multiple layers (surgical gowns, lead aprons) and may perspire into an incision if not kept cool ; excessive heat may also decrease concentration and increase errors.
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Original:  Surgeons wear multiple layers (surgical gowns, lead aprons) and may perspire into an incision if not kept cool and may decrease concentration and increase  errors.
Revised:  Surgeons wear multiple layers (surgical gowns, lead aprons) and may perspire into an incision if not kept cool and may decrease concentration and increase the frequency of errors.
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Original: The term is used frequently in psychology, popular writing , and journalism.
Revised: The term is used frequently in psychology, popular writing and journalism.
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Original:  Love-hate relationships and sometimes complete estrangement between adults and one or both  parents often indicates poor bonding with either parent in infancy, depressive symptoms of parents  and/or parental alienation in childhood.
Revised:  Love-hate relationships and sometimes complete estrangement between adults and one or both of their parents often indicates poor bonding with either parent in infancy, depressive symptoms of parents and/or parental alienation in childhood.
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Original:  As a way of understanding splitting, a common feature of BPD , in particular, but a common feature of NPDas well , is described as “a pattern of unstable and intense interpersonal relationships characterized by alternating between extremes of idealization and devaluation” (American Psychiatric Association, 2013, p. 663).
Revised:  As a way of understanding splitting, a common feature of BPD and NPD , is described as “a pattern of unstable and intense interpersonal relationships characterized by alternating between extremes of idealization and devaluation” (American Psychiatric Association, 2013, p. 663).
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Original:  A notable celebrity love-hate relationship and long time estrangement exists between Jon Voight and his daughter, Angelina Jolie .
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Original:  Despite feeling love for their alienated parent  they let go entirely of the loved object.
Revised:  Despite feeling love for their alienated parent , they let go entirely of the loved object.
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Original: A love–hate relationship is an interpersonal relationship involving simultaneous or alternating emotions of love and hate—something particularly common when emotions are intense.
Revised:  when emotions are intense.
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Original:  when emotions are intense.
Revised: A love–hate relationship is an interpersonal relationship involving simultaneous or alternating emotions of love and hate—something particularly common when emotions are intense.
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Original: Sean Hillary Locklear (born May 29, 1981) is an American football offensive tackle who is currently a free agent .
Revised: Sean Hillary Locklear (born May 29, 1981) is a former American football offensive tackle who is currently a free agent .
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Original: Sean Hillary Locklear (born May 29, 1981) is an American football offensive tackle who is currently a free agent .
Revised: Sean Hillary Locklear (born May 29, 1981) is an American football offensive tackle .
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Original:  Locklear has also played for the Washington Redskins, New York Giants, and Atlanta Falcons.
Revised:  Locklear also played for the Washington Redskins, New York Giants, and Atlanta Falcons.
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Original: Arrian, Anabasis of Alexander, §7.20Dionysius of Alexandria, Guide to the Inhabited World, §600Aelian, Characteristics of Animals, §11.9 The wild animals on the island were dedicated to Artemis and no one should harm them.
Revised: Arrian, Anabasis of Alexander, §7.20Dionysius of Alexandria, Guide to the Inhabited World, §600Aelian, Characteristics of Animals, §11.9 The wild animals on the island were dedicated to goddess and no one should harm them.
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Original:  Alexander the Great ordered the island to be called Icarus, after the Icarus island in the Aegean Sea.
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Original: Léopold Jorédié (1947 – 8 September 2013) was a former Vice-President of the Government of New Caledonia under Jean Lèques.
Revised: Léopold Jorédié (1947 – 8 September 2013) was a former Vice President of the Government of New Caledonia under Jean Lèques.
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Original:  After the defeat in 1674, some of the Torodbe migrated south to Bondu and some continued on to the Fouta Djallon.
Revised:  After the defeat in 1674, some of the Torodbe migrated south to Bundu and some continued on to the Fouta Djallon.
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Original:  The Zawāyā introduced Sufi brotherhoods to the black populations the south of the Sahara.
Revised:  The Zawāyā introduced Sufi brotherhoods to the black populations south of the Sahara.
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Original: The Zawāyā are tribes in the southern Sahara who have traditionally followed a deeply religious way of life.
Revised: The Zawaya are tribes in the southern Sahara who have traditionally followed a deeply religious way of life.
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Original:  The Zawāyā introduced Sufi brotherhoods to the black populations south of the Sahara.
Revised:  The Zawaya introduced Sufi brotherhoods to the black populations south of the Sahara.
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Original:  The jihad movements of the Fula people in the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries have their origins with the Zawāyā .
Revised:  The jihad movements of the Fula people in the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries have their origins with the Zawaya .
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Original:  Today the Zawāyā are one of the two noble castes of Mauritania.
Revised:  Today the Zawaya are one of the two noble castes of Mauritania.
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Original:  The Zawāyā were nomadic tribes from the arid lands to the north and east of the Senegal River in West Africa.
Revised:  The Zawaya were nomadic tribes from the arid lands to the north and east of the Senegal River in West Africa.
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Original:  The Zawāyā attempted to avoid conflict with the stronger warrior groups by renouncing arms and paying tribute.
Revised:  The Zawaya attempted to avoid conflict with the stronger warrior groups by renouncing arms and paying tribute.
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Original:  In the west, the Zawāyā were of Berber origin, while after the fifteenth century the warrior tribes were Arab.
Revised:  In the west, the Zawaya were of Berber origin, while after the fifteenth century the warrior tribes were Arab.
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Original:  The Zawāyā were Arab, while Berber or Tuareg tribes held military and political power.
Revised:  The Zawaya were Arab, while Berber or Tuareg tribes held military and political power.
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Original:  The Zawāyā , with their passive lifestyle of herding, prayer and study, were treated with some contempt by the stronger groups, but this was mingled with respect.
Revised:  The Zawaya , with their passive lifestyle of herding, prayer and study, were treated with some contempt by the stronger groups, but this was mingled with respect.
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Original:  He was a Zawāyā from the west and a regular attendant at the teaching circle of the jurist Maḥmūd, grandson of Anda Ag-Muhammad in the female line.
Revised:  He was a Zawaya from the west and a regular attendant at the teaching circle of the jurist Maḥmūd, grandson of Anda Ag-Muhammad in the female line.
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Original:  The separation of the tribes of this region into warrior and Zawāyā tribes had probably occurred before the fifteenth century.
Revised:  The separation of the tribes of this region into warrior and Zawaya tribes had probably occurred before the fifteenth century.
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Original:  By then some of the Zawāyā were moving south to avoid the depredations of the warrior tribes, risking conflict with the sedentary populations of Chemama, Gorgol and Tagant.
Revised:  By then some of the Zawaya were moving south to avoid the depredations of the warrior tribes, risking conflict with the sedentary populations of Chemama, Gorgol and Tagant.
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Original:  Hassāni rulers imposed heavy tributes on the Zawāyā , but did not give them effective protection against their enemies.
Revised:  Hassāni rulers imposed heavy tributes on the Zawaya , but did not give them effective protection against their enemies.
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Original:  Although subordinate to the Banū Ḥassan warriors, the Zawāyā ranked above other Berbers.
Revised:  Although subordinate to the Banū Ḥassan warriors, the Zawaya ranked above other Berbers.
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Original:  In the late seventeenth century, Awbek Ashfaga of the Banū Daymān tribe, later to style himself Nāșir al-Din ("Protector of the Faith"), emerged as a leader of the Zawāyā tribes in resisting the Hassān.
Revised:  In the late seventeenth century, Awbek Ashfaga of the Banū Daymān tribe, later to style himself Nāșir al-Din ("Protector of the Faith"), emerged as a leader of the Zawaya tribes in resisting the Hassān.
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Original:  Nāșir al-Din demanded strict obedience to his authority by the Zawāyā .
Revised:  Nāșir al-Din demanded strict obedience to his authority by the Zawaya .
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Original:  Nāșir al-Din was supported by most but not all of the Zawāyā , although some disputed his authority to impose the zakāt and did not assist him.
Revised:  Nāșir al-Din was supported by most but not all of the Zawaya , although some disputed his authority to impose the zakāt and did not assist him.
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Original:  There were at least three battles, in each of which the Zawāyā defeated the Hassān.
Revised:  There were at least three battles, in each of which the Zawaya defeated the Hassān.
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Original:  The Zawāyā elected Sīdī al-Fāḍil as Nāșir al-Din's successor, who took the name of al-Amīn.
Revised:  The Zawaya elected Sīdī al-Fāḍil as Nāșir al-Din's successor, who took the name of al-Amīn.
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Original:  Most of the Zawāyā were opposed to the peace, and deposed al-Amīn, replacing him with 'Uthmān, the former vizier and close friend of Nāșir al-Din.
Revised:  Most of the Zawaya were opposed to the peace, and deposed al-Amīn, replacing him with 'Uthmān, the former vizier and close friend of Nāșir al-Din.
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Original:  Following this defeat, the Zawāyā lost all temporal power and again became strictly tributary to the Hassān, and were parceled out among the Hassān groups.
Revised:  Following this defeat, the Zawaya lost all temporal power and again became strictly tributary to the Hassān, and were parceled out among the Hassān groups.
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Original:  Many of the Zawāyā continued their religious studies after puberty, while others engaged in commerce, agriculture, livestock management or hired out their labor where the work was consist with their religious practices.
Revised:  Many of the Zawaya continued their religious studies after puberty, while others engaged in commerce, agriculture, livestock management or hired out their labor where the work was consist with their religious practices.
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Original:  The Zawāyā were required to educate the Ḥassanī children.
Revised:  The Zawaya were required to educate the Ḥassanī children.
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Original:  This brought increased prosperity to the Hassāni of Ida Aish, who controlled the trade to Bakel on the Senega River, and took some of the profits that the Zawāyā had traditionally made from collecting and selling gum.
Revised:  This brought increased prosperity to the Hassāni of Ida Aish, who controlled the trade to Bakel on the Senega River, and took some of the profits that the Zawaya had traditionally made from collecting and selling gum.
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Original:  Both the Zawāyā and the Hassāni became more wealthy in slaves and material property, but a shift in the balance of power occurred as more students and clients were attracted to the Zawāyā , who also acquired better arms.
Revised:  Both the Zawaya and the Hassāni became more wealthy in slaves and material property, but a shift in the balance of power occurred as more students and clients were attracted to the Zawāyā , who also acquired better arms.
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Original:  Both the Zawāyā and the Hassāni became more wealthy in slaves and material property, but a shift in the balance of power occurred as more students and clients were attracted to the Zawāyā , who also acquired better arms.
Revised:  Both the Zawāyā and the Hassāni became more wealthy in slaves and material property, but a shift in the balance of power occurred as more students and clients were attracted to the Zawaya , who also acquired better arms.
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Original:  The rise of the Zawāyā as merchants coincided with growth in demand for religious instruction.
Revised:  The rise of the Zawaya as merchants coincided with growth in demand for religious instruction.
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Original:  The distinction between Zawāyā and Hassāni also began to blur, as each group entered the traditional occupations of the other.
Revised:  The distinction between Zawaya and Hassāni also began to blur, as each group entered the traditional occupations of the other.
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Original:  In modern Mauritania, the Zawāyā and Hassāni are both considered noble castes, dominating the politics of the country.
Revised:  In modern Mauritania, the Zawaya and Hassāni are both considered noble castes, dominating the politics of the country.
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Original:  The Zawāyā introduced sub-Saharan Africans to the two main Sufi brotherhoods.
Revised:  The Zawaya introduced sub-Saharan Africans to the two main Sufi brotherhoods.
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Original:  There are records of Zawāyā moving into the lands south of the Senegal in the seventeenth century, where they proselytized and intermarried with the local people.
Revised:  There are records of Zawaya moving into the lands south of the Senegal in the seventeenth century, where they proselytized and intermarried with the local people.
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Original:  Many West African libraries and collections of Islamic writings include works by Zawāyā authors.
Revised:  Many West African libraries and collections of Islamic writings include works by Zawaya authors.
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Original:  Today the Zawāyā continue to be in demand as teachers of the Quran in West African Islamic schools.
Revised:  Today the Zawaya continue to be in demand as teachers of the Quran in West African Islamic schools.
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Original:  During the people's assembly at Paardekraal he is elected fieldcornet of Middelburg and the neighbourhood of Oliefantsrivier , and shortly afterwards takes part in the military operations at Bronkhorstspruit and Majoeba.
Revised:  During the people's assembly at Paardekraal he is elected fieldcornet of Middelburg and the neighbourhood of Olifants River , and shortly afterwards takes part in the military operations at Bronkhorstspruit and Majoeba.
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Original:  Initially he was commander in Middelburg, in which time he played an active role during military expeditions against Mapog (1883-1884), Malabog, Modjadjie and Magoeba (1894-1895).
Revised:  Initially he was commander in Middelburg, in which time he played an active role during military expeditions against Mapoch (1883-1884), Malabog, Modjadjie and Magoeba (1894-1895).
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Original:  Initially he was commander in Middelburg, in which time he played an active role during military expeditions against Mapoch ( 1883-1884 ), Malaboch, Modjadji and Makgoba ( 1894-1895 ).
Revised:  Initially he was commander in Middelburg, in which time he played an active role during military expeditions against Mapoch ( 1883–1884 ), Malaboch, Modjadji and Makgoba ( 1894-1895 ).
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Original:  Initially he was commander in Middelburg, in which time he played an active role during military expeditions against Mapoch ( 1883-1884 ), Malaboch, Modjadji and Makgoba ( 1894-1895 ).
Revised:  Initially he was commander in Middelburg, in which time he played an active role during military expeditions against Mapoch ( 1883-1884 ), Malaboch, Modjadji and Makgoba ( 1894–1895 ).
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Original:  N. Pretorius ( 1844-1897 ), and Trichard's appointment was not undisputed among the officers of the State Artillery.
Revised:  N. Pretorius ( 1844–1897 ), and Trichard's appointment was not undisputed among the officers of the State Artillery.
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Original: State artilerist Shortly after Trichard and the Middelburg commando make an important contribution to the fight against dr. Jameson and his fellow invaders (1896), he is promoted in 1897 to commander of the State Artillery.
Revised: State artilerist Shortly after Trichard and the Middelburg commando make an important contribution to the fight against Jameson and his fellow invaders (1896), he is promoted in 1897 to commander of the State Artillery.
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Original:  In the same year  the State Artillery undertakes the Swaziland expedition  and in 1898 action is taken against Magato.
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Original:  In the same year  the State Artillery undertakes the Swaziland expedition  and in 1898 action is taken against Magato.
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Original:  In the same year  the State Artillery undertakes the Swaziland expedition  and in 1898 action is taken against Magato.
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Original:  In the same year  the State Artillery undertakes the Swaziland expedition  and in 1898 action is taken against Magato.
Revised:  In the same year the State Artillery undertakes the Swaziland expedition and in 1898 action was taken against Magato.
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Original:  The State Artillery is already regarded as a close elite corps  thanks to his predecessor, but under Trichard it would be modernized and expanded.
Revised:  The State Artillery was already regarded as a close elite corps thanks to his predecessor, but under Trichard it would be modernized and expanded.
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Original:  The State Artillery is already regarded as a close elite corps  thanks to his predecessor, but under Trichard it would be modernized and expanded.
Revised:  The State Artillery is already regarded as a close elite corps , thanks to his predecessor, but under Trichard it would be modernized and expanded.
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Original:  The State Artillery is already regarded as a close elite corps  thanks to his predecessor, but under Trichard it would be modernized and expanded.
Revised:  The State Artillery is already regarded as a close elite corps thanks to his predecessor, but under Trichard it was modernized and expanded.
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Original:  During the Second Boer War  he fought on the Natal front, where he was involved at Dundee and Ladysmith.
Revised:  During the Second Boer War , he fought on the Natal front, where he was involved at Dundee and Ladysmith.
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Original:  At the battle of Dalmanutha in August 1900  he successfully demonstrated the State Artillery's abilities , but it would also ring their unit's death bell.
Revised:  At the battle of Dalmanutha in August 1900 , he successfully demonstrated the State Artillery's abilities , but it would also ring their unit's death bell.
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Original:  At the battle of Dalmanutha in August 1900  he successfully demonstrated the State Artillery's abilities , but it would also ring their unit's death bell.
Revised:  At the battle of Dalmanutha in August 1900 he successfully demonstrated the State Artillery's capabilities , but it would also ring their unit's death bell.
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Original:  As a previously wealthy farmer from the Middelburg district  Colonel Trichard submitted a claim for damages after conclusion of peace.
Revised:  As a previously wealthy farmer from the Middelburg district , Colonel Trichard submitted a claim for damages after conclusion of peace.
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Original: ZAR citizen and officer As a young man  he participated in the ZAR's campaigns against Mapoch, the Swazis and Sekhukhune.
Revised: ZAR citizen and officer As a young man , he participated in the ZAR's campaigns against Mapoch, the Swazis and Sekhukhune.
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Original:  During the people's assembly at Paardekraal he is elected fieldcornet of Middelburg and the neighbourhood of Olifants River, and shortly afterwards takes part in the military operations at Bronkhorstspruit and Majoeba.
Revised:  During the people's assembly at Paardekraal , he was elected fieldcornet of Middelburg and the neighbourhood of Olifants River, and shortly afterwards takes part in the military operations at Bronkhorstspruit and Majoeba.
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Original:  Initially  he was commander in Middelburg, in which time he played an active role during military expeditions against Mapoch (1883–1884), Malaboch, Modjadji and Makgoba (1894–1895).
Revised:  Initially , he was commander in Middelburg, in which time he played an active role during military expeditions against Mapoch (1883–1884), Malaboch, Modjadji and Makgoba (1894–1895).
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