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Original:  The following is a sequential email exchange regarding Airbus as recorded in the  Record: Special Asst. to the Secretary and Director of Air Force Communications Bill Bodie:  We don't have to turn the other cheek, you know.
Revised:  The following is a sequential email exchange regarding Airbus as recorded in the Record: Special Asst. to the Secretary and Director of Air Force Communications Bill Bodie: " We don't have to turn the other cheek, you know.
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Original:   Secretary of the Air Force James Roche:  No, Sir, save it and blow him away.
Revised:  " Secretary of the Air Force James Roche: No, Sir, save it and blow him away.
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Original:   Secretary of the Air Force James Roche:  No, Sir, save it and blow him away.
Revised:  Secretary of the Air Force James Roche: " No, Sir, save it and blow him away.
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Original:   Civilian Deputy Undersecretary of the Air Force for Acquisition Darleen Druyun:  I read with disgust the article on Airbus tankers from the new EADS CEO of North America.
Revised:  " Civilian Deputy Undersecretary of the Air Force for Acquisition Darleen Druyun: I read with disgust the article on Airbus tankers from the new EADS CEO of North America.
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Original:   Civilian Deputy Undersecretary of the Air Force for Acquisition Darleen Druyun:  I read with disgust the article on Airbus tankers from the new EADS CEO of North America.
Revised:  Civilian Deputy Undersecretary of the Air Force for Acquisition Darleen Druyun: " I read with disgust the article on Airbus tankers from the new EADS CEO of North America.
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Original:   Secretary of the Air Force James Roche:  Oy.
Revised:  " Secretary of the Air Force James Roche: Oy.
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Original:   Secretary of the Air Force James Roche:  Oy.
Revised:  Secretary of the Air Force James Roche: " Oy.
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Original:   An email from Burkhardt & Associates to James Roche advises the Secretary to release fiscal numbers favorable to Boeing, apparently regardless of the facts . "I'd distribute a one page memo saying the per plane cost of the lease will not be greater than x and have x be less than the last lease Boeing did for some commercial entity--or that x is y dollars less than the cost of a new tanker," it said.
Revised:  " An email from Burkhardt & Associates to James Roche advises the Secretary to release fiscal numbers favorable to Boeing, apparently regardless of the facts . "I'd distribute a one page memo saying the per plane cost of the lease will not be greater than x and have x be less than the last lease Boeing did for some commercial entity--or that x is y dollars less than the cost of a new tanker," it said.
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Original:   An email from Burkhardt & Associates to James Roche advises the Secretary to release fiscal numbers favorable to Boeing, apparently regardless of the facts . "I'd distribute a one page memo saying the per plane cost of the lease will not be greater than x and have x be less than the last lease Boeing did for some commercial entity--or that x is y dollars less than the cost of a new tanker," it said.
Revised:  An email from Burkhardt & Associates to James Roche advises the Secretary to release fiscal numbers favorable to Boeing, apparently regardless of the facts : "I'd distribute a one page memo saying the per plane cost of the lease will not be greater than x and have x be less than the last lease Boeing did for some commercial entity--or that x is y dollars less than the cost of a new tanker," it said.
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Original:  Boeing had previously hired civilian deputy undersecretary of the Air Force for Acquisition Darleen Druyun.
Revised:  Boeing had previously hired Civilian Deputy Undersecretary of the Air Force for Acquisition Darleen Druyun.
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Original:  Deputy Defense Secretary Wolfowitz published an open-article in the Congressional Review , saying: "After we have selected an appropriate alternative, we intend to require competition.
Revised:  Deputy Defense Secretary Wolfowitz published an open-article in the Congressional Record , saying: "After we have selected an appropriate alternative, we intend to require competition.
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Original:  Airbus manufacturers a number of passenger and military aircraft and has gained passenger market share on Boeing in recent years.
Revised:  Airbus manufacturers a number of passenger and military aircraft and has gained market share in passenger aircraft over Boeing in recent years.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the released emails, Air Force officials responsible for the awarding of contracts appear biased against Boeing's main competitor, Airbus and its CEO Ralph Crosby.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Airbus is owned by European Aeronautic Defense%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Space Company (EADS).
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Space Company (EADS).
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Original:  An email from Burkhardt%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Associates to James Roche advises the Secretary to release fiscal numbers favorable to Boeing, apparently regardless of the facts: "I'd distribute a one page memo saying the per plane cost of the lease will not be greater than x and have x be less than the last lease Boeing did for some commercial entity--or that x is y dollars less than the cost of a new tanker," it said.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Associates to James Roche advises the Secretary to release fiscal numbers favorable to Boeing, apparently regardless of the facts: "I'd distribute a one page memo saying the per plane cost of the lease will not be greater than x and have x be less than the last lease Boeing did for some commercial entity--or that x is y dollars less than the cost of a new tanker," it said.
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Original:  GovExec.com quotes a "Senate aide" as saying: "The House language%DIFDELCMD < [%%% of the spending bill ignores an analysis of alternatives called for in last year's authorizing language and by Pentagon Acquisition Director Michael Wynne and the DSB.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% of the spending bill ignores an analysis of alternatives called for in last year's authorizing language and by Pentagon Acquisition Director Michael Wynne and the DSB.
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Original:  GovExec.com quotes a "Senate aide" as saying: "The House language%DIFDELCMD < [%%% of the spending bill ignores an analysis of alternatives called for in last year's authorizing language and by Pentagon Acquisition Director Michael Wynne and the DSB.
Revised:  GovExec.com quotes a "Senate aide" as saying: "The House language%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ignores an analysis of alternatives called for in last year's authorizing language and by Pentagon Acquisition Director Michael Wynne and the DSB.
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Original:  Emails exchanged among United States Air Force officials regarding a USD$23 billion dollar deal with aircraft manufacturer Boeing have been entered into the public record.
Revised:  Emails exchanged among officials regarding a USD$23 billion dollar deal with aircraft manufacturer Boeing have been entered into the public record.
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Original:  Emails exchanged among United States Air Force officials regarding a USD$23 billion dollar deal with aircraft manufacturer Boeing have been entered into the public record.
Revised:  Emails exchanged among United States Air Force officials regarding a USD$23 billion dollar deal with aircraft manufacturer have been entered into the public record.
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Original:  Senator John McCain (R-AZ ) entered them into the Congressional Record during a speech last week against the now-cancelled deal to lease 100 mid-air tanker aircraft from Boeing.
Revised:  (-AZ ) entered them into the Congressional Record during a speech last week against the now-cancelled deal to lease 100 mid-air tanker aircraft from Boeing.
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Original:  Senator John McCain (R-AZ ) entered them into the Congressional Record during a speech last week against the now-cancelled deal to lease 100 mid-air tanker aircraft from Boeing.
Revised:  Senator John McCain (R-AZ ) entered them into the during a speech last week against the now-cancelled deal to lease 100 mid-air tanker aircraft from Boeing.
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Original:  Senator John McCain (R-AZ ) entered them into the Congressional Record during a speech last week against the now-cancelled deal to lease 100 mid-air tanker aircraft from Boeing.
Revised:  Senator John McCain (R-AZ ) entered them into the Congressional Record during a speech last week against the now-cancelled deal to lease 100 aircraft from Boeing.
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Original:  Congressional lawmakers rejected the proposal in October, although industry experts say the deal had been killed by the Pentagon because of reports stating that the deal had favored Boeing.
Revised:  Congressional lawmakers rejected the proposal in October, although industry experts say the deal had been killed by the because of reports stating that the deal had favored Boeing.
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Original:  The original negotiations with Boeing were over a no-bid contract .
Revised:  The original negotiations with Boeing were over a .
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Original:  This leaves no-bid contracts open to accusations of conflicts of interest among the procurement personnel.
Revised:  This leaves no-bid contracts open to accusations of among the procurement personnel.
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Original:  In the released emails, Air Force officials responsible for the awarding of contracts appear biased against Boeing's main competitor, Airbus and its CEO Ralph Crosby .
Revised:  In the released emails, Air Force officials responsible for the awarding of contracts appear biased against Boeing's main competitor, and its .
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Original:  Airbus is owned by European Aeronautic Defense & Space Company (EADS).
Revised:  is owned by European Aeronautic Defense & Space Company (EADS).
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Original:  Boeing had previously hired Civilian Deputy Undersecretary of the Air Force for Acquisition Darleen Druyun .
Revised:  Boeing had previously hired Civilian Deputy Undersecretary of the Air Force for Acquisition .
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Original:  McCain's remarks, the Air Force said the tanker replacement contract would be revived as an open bid . Deputy Defense Secretary Wolfowitz published an open-article in the Congressional Record, saying: "After we have selected an appropriate alternative, we intend to require competition.
Revised:  McCain's remarks, the Air Force said the tanker replacement contract would be revived as an . Deputy Defense Secretary Wolfowitz published an open-article in the Congressional Record, saying: "After we have selected an appropriate alternative, we intend to require competition.
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Original:  McCain's remarks, the Air Force said the tanker replacement contract would be revived as an open bid . Deputy Defense Secretary Wolfowitz published an open-article in the Congressional Record, saying: "After we have selected an appropriate alternative, we intend to require competition.
Revised:  McCain's remarks, the Air Force said the tanker replacement contract would be revived as an open bid . Deputy Defense Secretary published an open-article in the Congressional Record, saying: "After we have selected an appropriate alternative, we intend to require competition.
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Original:  The United Nations High Commisioner for Refugees is reporting that thousands of Rwandan asylum seekers who fled to neighbouring Burundi over the last few months have been forced to return home.
Revised: right The United Nations High Commisioner for Refugees is reporting that thousands of Rwandan asylum seekers who fled to neighbouring Burundi over the last few months have been forced to return home.
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Original: right The United Nations High Commisioner for Refugees is reporting that thousands of Rwandan asylum seekers who fled to neighbouring Burundi over the last few months have been forced to return home.
Revised:  The United Nations High Commisioner for Refugees is reporting that thousands of Rwandan asylum seekers who fled to neighbouring Burundi over the last few months have been forced to return home.
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Original:  "Families are coming to identify and claim the bodies, while those that can not be identified or nobody claims them will be interred by the mosque.   
Revised:  "Families are coming to identify and claim the bodies, while those that can not be identified or nobody claims them will be interred by the mosque. " 
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Original:  It is so terrible.   
Revised:  It is so terrible. " 
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Original: The elections which sparked the violence, did, according to a rumor spread around the city, result in the Christian People's Democratic Party beat the All Nigerian Peoples Party, a predominantly Muslim party.
Revised: The elections which sparked the violence, did, according to a rumor spread around the city, result in the Christian People's Democratic Party beating the All Nigerian Peoples Party, a predominantly Muslim party.
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Original:  "Families are coming to identify and claim the bodies, while those that can not be identified or nobody claims them will be interred by the mosque."
Revised:  "Families are coming to identify and claim the bodies, while those that cannot be identified or nobody claims them will be interred by the mosque."
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Original:  "Families are coming to identify and claim the bodies, while those that can not be identified or nobody claims them will be interred by the mosque."
Revised:  "Families are coming to identify and claim the bodies, while those that can not be identified or are not claimed by anybody will be interred by the mosque."
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Original:  In an effort to stop the fighting, the army has been ordered to open fire on people to stop fighting, and create buffer zone between the Christians and the Muslims.
Revised:  In an effort to stop the fighting, the army has been ordered to open fire on people , and to create a buffer zone between the Christians and the Muslims.
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Original: Yakumu Pam, a Christian Cleryman in Jos also commented on the chaos.
Revised: Yakumu Pam, a Christian Clergyman in Jos also commented on the chaos.
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Original:  A "Truth Today" talk show is planned for later on although, unlike previous events, the fugitive ex-PM Thaksin Shinawatra is not expected to feature.
Revised:  A "Truth Today" talk show is planned for later on , although it is unclear if the fugitive ex-PM Thaksin Shinawatra is not expected to feature.
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Original:  A "Truth Today" talk show is planned for later on although, unlike previous events, the fugitive ex-PM Thaksin Shinawatra is not expected to feature.
Revised:  A "Truth Today" talk show is planned for later on although, unlike previous events, the fugitive ex-PM Thaksin Shinawatra will feature.
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Original:  Thailand's Prime Minister remains in Chiang Mai in the north of the country having declared a state of emergency around the two sieged airports on Friday.
Revised:  Thailand's Prime Minister remains in Chiang Mai in the north of the country having declared a state of emergency around the two besieged airports on Friday.
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Original:  Agriculture is hard hit with air export of fresh produce usually routed through Suvarnabhumi airport . No new tourists are entering the country, many nations have advised their citizens not to travel to the country , and the repercussions in the tourist industry are expected to last well into 2009.
Revised:  Agriculture is hard hit with export by air of fresh produce usually routed through Suvarnabhumi airport . No new tourists are entering the country, many nations have advised their citizens not to travel to the country , and the repercussions in the tourist industry are expected to last well into 2009.
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Original:  Agriculture is hard hit with air export of fresh produce usually routed through Suvarnabhumi airport . No new tourists are entering the country, many nations have advised their citizens not to travel to the country , and the repercussions in the tourist industry are expected to last well into 2009.
Revised:  Agriculture is hard hit with air export of fresh produce usually routed through Suvarnabhumi . No new tourists are entering the country, many nations have advised their citizens not to travel to the country , and the repercussions in the tourist industry are expected to last well into 2009.
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Original:  In a press conference at the Foreign Ministry, Deputy Prime Minister Olarn Chaipravat highlighted the plight of the hotel, tour, and restaurant trades expected to be hardest hit in the wake of the crisis    .
Revised:  In a press conference at the Foreign Ministry, Deputy Prime Minister Olarn Chaipravat highlighted the plight of the hotel, tour, and restaurant trades expected to be hardest hit in the wake of the crisis . .
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Original:  Agriculture is hard hit with export by air of fresh produce  usually routed through Suvarnabhumi .
Revised:  Agriculture is hard hit because the export of fresh produce usually routed through Suvarnabhumi .
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Original:  No new tourists are entering the country , many nations have advised their citizens not to travel to Bangkok, and the repercussions in the tourist industry are expected to last well into 2009.
Revised:  No new tourists are entering the country ; many nations have advised their citizens not to travel to Bangkok, and the repercussions in the tourist industry are expected to last well into 2009.
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Original:  A report in The Bangkok Post suggests  as many as one million in the industry could lose their jobs.
Revised:  A report in The Bangkok Post suggests that as many as one million in the industry could lose their jobs.
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Original:  The court may face pressure from the pro-government UDD, their city hall rally is only minutes away from the court buildings and they could surround the premises to protest the court moving to closing statements and a verdict on the fate of the parties in the ruling coalition.
Revised:  The court may face pressure from the pro-government UDD, their city hall rally is only minutes away from the court buildings . This means that they could surround the premises to protest the court moving to closing statements and a verdict on the fate of the parties in the ruling coalition.
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Original:  Violence against the PAD demonstrators encamped at Government House saw another grenade attack on Saturday night.
Revised:  The PAD demonstrators encamped at Government House saw another grenade attack on Saturday night.
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Original: 2008: the stories January January 1: Cyprus and Malta adopt the euro 110px|Maltese €1 coin On the first day of 2008, at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency, less than four years after their accession to the European Union.
Revised: 2008: the stories January January 1: Cyprus and Malta adopt the euro On the first day of 2008, at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency, less than four years after their accession to the European Union.
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Original: 2008: the stories January January 1: Cyprus and Malta adopt the euro 110px|Maltese €1 coin On the first day of 2008, at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency, less than four years after their accession to the European Union.
Revised: 2008: the stories January January 1: Cyprus and Malta adopt the euro 110px|Maltese €1 coin On the first day of 2008, at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small in the and former , adopted the euro as their official currency, less than four years after their accession to the European Union.
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Original: 2008: the stories January January 1: Cyprus and Malta adopt the euro 110px|Maltese €1 coin On the first day of 2008, at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency, less than four years after their accession to the European Union.
Revised: 2008: the stories January January 1: Cyprus and Malta adopt the euro 110px|Maltese €1 coin On the first day of 2008, at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the as their official currency, less than four years after their accession to the European Union.
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Original:  Because Cyprus and Malta are in different time zones , Cyprus adopted the euro one hour before Malta did.
Revised:  Because Cyprus and Malta are in different , Cyprus adopted the euro one hour before Malta did.
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Original:  In both countries the euro was welcomed with outdoor celebrations, including a fireworks display in the Maltese capital of Valletta .
Revised:  In both countries the euro was welcomed with outdoor celebrations, including a fireworks display in the Maltese capital of .
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Original:  In Hong Kong, the Hang Seng index fell 5.5 percent - its biggest fall since the September 11, 2001 terrorist attacks.
Revised:  In Hong Kong, the fell 5.5 percent - its biggest fall since the September 11, 2001 terrorist attacks.
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Original:  February 11: Rebels shoot East Timor president José Ramos-Horta , President of East Timor, was shot by rebel soldiers in an attack on his home near the capital of Dili .
Revised:  February 11: Rebels shoot East Timor president , President of East Timor, was shot by rebel soldiers in an attack on his home near the capital of Dili .
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Original:  February 11: Rebels shoot East Timor president José Ramos-Horta , President of East Timor, was shot by rebel soldiers in an attack on his home near the capital of Dili .
Revised:  February 11: Rebels shoot East Timor president José Ramos-Horta , President of East Timor, was shot by rebel soldiers in an attack on his home near the capital of .
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Original:  As a result of the attack he underwent treatment at the Royal Darwin Hospital 's intensive care unit in Darwin , Australia.
Revised:  As a result of the attack he underwent treatment at the 's intensive care unit in Darwin , Australia.
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Original:  As a result of the attack he underwent treatment at the Royal Darwin Hospital 's intensive care unit in Darwin , Australia.
Revised:  As a result of the attack he underwent treatment at the Royal Darwin Hospital 's intensive care unit in , Australia.
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Original:  The bombing took place in the Kandahar city area of the country, with early reports saying that took place in the Western areas of the city, which is in the South of Afghanistan.
Revised:  The bombing took place in the city area of the country, with early reports saying that took place in the Western areas of the city, which is in the South of Afghanistan.
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Original:  The Indonesia based news agency Antara News reported that the bombing took place during a dog fighting match.
Revised:  The Indonesia based news agency reported that the bombing took place during a dog fighting match.
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