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Original:  The crew then sought clearance to land across the border in Peshawar, Pakistan before it lost contact with air control.
Revised:  The crew then sought clearance to land across the border in , before it lost contact with air control.
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Original: In 1988 , Senator and Vice President canidate Dan Quayle compared himself to Jack Kennedy and Bentsen replied, "Senator, I served with Jack Kennedy.
Revised: Bentsen is most famous for his words during a 1988 , Senator and Vice President canidate Dan Quayle compared himself to Jack Kennedy and Bentsen replied, "Senator, I served with Jack Kennedy.
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Original: In 1988 , Senator and Vice President canidate Dan Quayle compared himself to Jack Kennedy and Bentsen replied, "Senator, I served with Jack Kennedy.
Revised: In 1988 Vice Presidential Debate. Senator and candidate for Vice President Dan Quayle compared himself to Jack Kennedy and Bentsen replied, "Senator, I served with Jack Kennedy.
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Original:  Senator, you are no Jack Kennedy  " during the debate for Vice President .
Revised:  Senator, you are no Jack Kennedy . " during the debate for Vice President .
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Original:  In 1998, Bentsen suffered a small stroke which he said was casued by a 3-month long trip to 15 different nations.
Revised:  In 1998, Bentsen suffered a small stroke which he said was caused by a 3-month long trip to 15 different nations.
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Original:  Senator and candidate for Vice President Dan Quayle compared himself to former President John F. Kennedy and Bentsen replied, "Senator, I served with Jack Kennedy.
Revised:  Senator and candidate for Vice President Dan Quayle compared himself to former President John F. Kennedy when he sought the presidency. Bentsen replied, "Senator, I served with Jack Kennedy.
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Original: The well-known pro-human rights  NGO, Amnesty International, described 2005 as a year of contradictions with signs of hope for human rights being undermined through "deception and failed promises" of "arrogant" governments.
Revised: The pro-human rights NGO, Amnesty International, described 2005 as a year of contradictions with signs of hope for human rights being undermined through "deception and failed promises" of "arrogant" governments.
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Original: The well-known pro-human rights  NGO, Amnesty International, described 2005 as a year of contradictions with signs of hope for human rights being undermined through "deception and failed promises" of "arrogant" governments.
Revised: The well-known pro-human rights group NGO, Amnesty International, described 2005 as a year of contradictions with signs of hope for human rights being undermined through "deception and failed promises" of "arrogant" governments.
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Original: The pro-human rights group NGO, Amnesty International, described 2005 as a year of contradictions with signs of hope for human rights being undermined through "deception and failed promises" of "arrogant" governments.
Revised: The human rights watchdog NGO, Amnesty International, described 2005 as a year of contradictions with signs of hope for human rights being undermined through "deception and failed promises" of "arrogant" governments.
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Original:  The score card of prolonged conflicts and mounting human rights abuses is there for all to see ... the ‘war on terror ’ is failing and will continue to fail until human rights and human security are given precedence over narrow national security interests," said Ms Khan.
Revised:  The score card of prolonged conflicts and mounting human rights abuses is there for all to see ... the ‘war on terror ' is failing and will continue to fail until human rights and human security are given precedence over narrow national security interests," said Ms Khan.
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Original:  that the US Administration close Guantánamo Bay detention camp, and disclose the names and locations of all ‘war on terror ’ prisoners elsewhere;
Revised:  that the US Administration close Guantánamo Bay detention camp, and disclose the names and locations of all ‘war on terror ' prisoners elsewhere;
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Original:  This is the firstreport of the virus spreading through a three person chain.
Revised:  This is the first report of the virus spreading through a three person chain.
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Original: They also strssed that "to date, the investigation has found no evidence of spread within the general community and no evidence that efficient human-to-human transmission has occurred."
Revised: They also stressed that "to date, the investigation has found no evidence of spread within the general community and no evidence that efficient human-to-human transmission has occurred."
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Original:  The viruses showed no mutations associated with resistance to the neuraminidase inhibitors, including oseltamivir (Tamiflu) . "
Revised:  The viruses showed no mutations associated with resistance to the neuraminidase inhibitors, including oseltamivir (Tamiflu) "
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Original: " The truth is that he has no connection whatsoever with the events of September 11.
Revised: " He had no connection at all with Sept. 11. I am the one in charge of the events of September 11.
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Original:  I am certain of what I say because I was responsible for entrusting the 19 brothers ... with the raids," said bin Laden  [ . 
Revised:  I am certain of what I say because I was responsible for entrusting the 19 brothers ... with the raids," said bin Laden [ . "
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Original:  I am certain of what I say  because I was responsible for entrusting the 19 brothers ... with the raids ," said bin Laden who was speaking about the 9/11 highjackers.
Revised:  I am certain of what I say , because I was responsible for entrusting the 19 brothers ... with the raids ," said bin Laden who was speaking about the 9/11 highjackers.
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Original:  It knows this very well," added bin Ladn .
Revised:  It knows this very well," added bin Laden .
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Original: Map of East Timor  Australian Minister for Foreign Affairs, Alexander Downer (  Mayo, Liberal told parliament on Tuesday that the government has received fresh reports of violence in East Timor.
Revised: Map of East Timor Australian Minister for Foreign Affairs, Alexander Downer ( Mayo, Liberal ) told parliament that the government has received fresh reports of violence in East Timor.
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Original:  Mr  Downer told the Australian House of Representatives that he has received fresh reports of violence breaking out in parts of the East Timorese capital Dili as well as other parts of the nation.
Revised:  Mr . Downer told the Australian House of Representatives that he has received fresh reports of violence breaking out in parts of the East Timorese capital Dili as well as other parts of the nation.
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Original:  Mr  Downer told the Australian House of Representatives that he has received fresh reports of violence breaking out in parts of the East Timorese capital Dili as well as other parts of the nation.
Revised:  Mr Downer told the Australian House of Representatives that he has received fresh reports of violence erupting in parts of the East Timorese capital Dili as well as other parts of the nation.
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Original:  According to the Australian Deparment of Foreign Affairs and Trade (DFAT), there were shoot outs near Becora and Fatuahi on Tuesday involving the East Timorese military and militia.
Revised:  According to the Australian Department of Foreign Affairs and Trade (DFAT), there were shoot outs near Becora and Fatuahi on Tuesday involving the East Timorese military and militia.
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Original:  Violence broke out in East Timor in April , 2006 following the dismissal of 585 East Timorese soldiers for deserting.
Revised:  Violence erupted in East Timor in April , 2006 following the dismissal of 585 East Timorese soldiers for deserting.
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Original:  Violence broke out in East Timor in April , 2006 following the dismissal of 585 East Timorese soldiers for deserting.
Revised:  Violence broke out in East Timor in April 2006 following the dismissal of 585 East Timorese soldiers for deserting.
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Original:  An independent commission has been setup by the East timorese government to investigate complaints by the dismissed soldiers.
Revised:  An independent commission has been setup by the East Timorese government to investigate complaints by the dismissed soldiers.
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Original:  Mr  Downer urged the commission to "conclude it's work quickly as a first step to the resolution of the current crisis".
Revised:  Mr . Downer urged the commission to "conclude it's work quickly as a first step to the resolution of the current crisis".
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Original:  Mr  Downer urged the commission to "conclude it's work quickly as a first step to the resolution of the current crisis".
Revised:  Mr Downer urged the commission to "conclude its work quickly as a first step to the resolution of the current crisis".
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Original:  Mr  Downer said that he had made it clear to the East Timorese government that Australia will assist in East Timor if requested.
Revised:  Mr . Downer said that he had made it clear to the East Timorese government that Australia will assist in East Timor if requested.
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Original:  He said that the Australian military have a rapid response team, consisiting of naval ships, aircraft and troops deployed in Northern Australia ready to go to East Timor if requested.
Revised:  He said that the Australian military have a rapid response team, consisting of naval ships, aircraft and troops deployed in Northern Australia ready to go to East Timor if requested.
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Original: Sir Edmund Hillary is angry at 40 mountaineers, including Mark Inglis,  first double amputee to reach Everest summit , who left  British climber to die.
Revised: Sir Edmund Hillary is angry at 40 mountaineers, including Mark Inglis, the first double amputee to reach Everest summit , who left British climber to die.
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Original: Sir Edmund Hillary is angry at 40 mountaineers, including Mark Inglis,  first double amputee to reach Everest summit , who left  British climber to die.
Revised: Sir Edmund Hillary is angry at 40 mountaineers, including Mark Inglis, first double amputee to reach the summit of Mount Everest , who left British climber to die.
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Original: Sir Edmund Hillary is angry at 40 mountaineers, including Mark Inglis,  first double amputee to reach Everest summit , who left  British climber to die.
Revised: Sir Edmund Hillary is angry at 40 mountaineers, including Mark Inglis, first double amputee to reach Everest summit , who left a British climber to die.
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Original:   34 year old climber David Sharp had finally managed to conquer Everest , after 2 other unsuccessful attempts, and on his way back he ran out of oxygen  . Mark Inglis was the first of 40 people to pass David Sharp and he radioed in but Russ said that he is effectively dead.
Revised:  34 , who had finally managed to conquer Everest , after 2 other unsuccessful attempts, and on his way back he ran out of oxygen . Mark Inglis was the first of 40 people to pass David Sharp and he radioed in but Russ said that he is effectively dead.
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Original:   34 year old climber David Sharp had finally managed to conquer Everest , after 2 other unsuccessful attempts, and on his way back he ran out of oxygen  . Mark Inglis was the first of 40 people to pass David Sharp and he radioed in but Russ said that he is effectively dead.
Revised:  34 year old climber David Sharp had finally managed to conquer Everest after 2 other unsuccessful attempts, and on his way back he ran out of oxygen . Mark Inglis was the first of 40 people to pass David Sharp and he radioed in but Russ said that he is effectively dead.
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Original:   34 year old climber David Sharp had finally managed to conquer Everest , after 2 other unsuccessful attempts, and on his way back he ran out of oxygen  . Mark Inglis was the first of 40 people to pass David Sharp and he radioed in but Russ said that he is effectively dead.
Revised:  34 year old climber David Sharp had finally managed to conquer Everest , after 2 other unsuccessful attempts, ran out of oxygen . Mark Inglis was the first of 40 people to pass David Sharp and he radioed in but Russ said that he is effectively dead.
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Original:   34 year old climber David Sharp had finally managed to conquer Everest , after 2 other unsuccessful attempts, and on his way back he ran out of oxygen  . Mark Inglis was the first of 40 people to pass David Sharp and he radioed in but Russ said that he is effectively dead.
Revised:  34 year old climber David Sharp had finally managed to conquer Everest , after 2 other unsuccessful attempts, and on his way back he ran out of oxygen on his way back . Mark Inglis was the first of 40 people to pass David Sharp and he radioed in but Russ said that he is effectively dead.
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Original:  David Sharp's parents said that they do not blame Mark Inglis, or anyone else for their son's death, the other climbers had to look after themselves.
Revised:  Sharp's parents said that they do not blame Mark Inglis, or anyone else for their son's death, the other climbers had to look after themselves.
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Original:  David Sharp was found 305 meters below the summit, in a cave.
Revised:  Sharp was found 305 meters below the summit, in a cave.
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Original: David Sharp, 34, who had finally managed to conquer Everest after 2 other unsuccessful attempts, ran out of oxygen on his way back.
Revised: David Sharp, 34, who had reached the summit of Everest after two other unsuccessful attempts, ran out of oxygen on his way back.
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Original:   Sir Edmund Hillary    said that heading for the summit and letting people lie dying is not pleasant and he hopes it is not repeated.
Revised:  " Sir Edmund Hillary said that heading for the summit and letting people lie dying is not pleasant and he hopes it is not repeated.
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Original:   Sir Edmund Hillary    said that heading for the summit and letting people lie dying is not pleasant and he hopes it is not repeated.
Revised:  Sir Edmund Hillary Hillary faulted commercialisation of the mountain for the climber's death, saying that had a fellow climber been in distress he would have helped him even if it meant abandoning his own summit quest. "I think the whole attitude towards climbing Mount Everest has become rather horrifying," The New Zealand Herald newspaper quoted him as saying. "The people just want to get to the top. They don't give a damn for anybody else who may be in distress." said that heading for the summit and letting people lie dying is not pleasant and he hopes it is not repeated.
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Original:   Sir Edmund Hillary    said that heading for the summit and letting people lie dying is not pleasant and he hopes it is not repeated.
Revised:  Sir Edmund Hillary Hillary said that heading for the summit and letting people lie dying is not pleasant and he hopes it is not repeated.
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Original:  Sharp's parents  said that they do not blame Mark Inglis, or anyone else for their son's death, the other climbers had to look after themselves . Sharp was found 305 meters below the summit, in a cave.
Revised:  Sharp's parents said that they do not blame Inglis, or anyone else for their son's death, the other climbers had to look after themselves . Sharp was found 305 meters below the summit, in a cave.
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Original:  Sharp's parents  said that they do not blame Mark Inglis, or anyone else for their son's death, the other climbers had to look after themselves . Sharp was found 305 meters below the summit, in a cave.
Revised:  Sharp's parents said that they do not blame Mark Inglis, or anyone else for their son's death, the other climbers had to look after themselves Sharp was found 305 meters below the summit, in a cave.
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Original: Inglis on Monday became the first double amputee to reach the summit of Everest, climbing on carbon-fiber artificial legs.
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Original:  The United Nations Security Council met behind closed doors Friday and issued tough statements right before North Korea's holiday. remained defiant during its celebration Sunday in the face of the criticism for the nation's pursuit of nuclear delivery capability last week. gave his first formal address on Sunday in the aftermath of Friday's failed attempt to launch a multistage rocket into orbit and in honor of the anniversary of 100th birthday.
Revised:  remained defiant during its celebration Sunday in the face of the criticism for the nation's pursuit of nuclear delivery capability last week. gave his first formal address on Sunday in the aftermath of Friday's failed attempt to launch a multistage rocket into orbit and in honor of the anniversary of 100th birthday.
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Original:  In the statement, China expressed impatience with its neighbor and said China's foreign policy toward North Korea would not be hijacked by North Korea's leaders.   remained defiant during its celebration Sunday in the face of the criticism for the nation's pursuit of nuclear delivery capability last week . gave his first formal address on Sunday in the aftermath of Friday's failed attempt to launch a multistage rocket into orbit and in honor of the anniversary of 100th birthday.
Revised:  In the statement, China expressed impatience with its neighbor and said China's foreign policy toward North Korea would not be hijacked by North Korea's leaders. Diplomatic pressure on North Korea continued this week as the country remained defiant during its celebration Sunday in the face of the criticism for the nation's pursuit of nuclear delivery capability last week . gave his first formal address on Sunday in the aftermath of Friday's failed attempt to launch a multistage rocket into orbit and in honor of the anniversary of 100th birthday.
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Original:  In the statement, China expressed impatience with its neighbor and said China's foreign policy toward North Korea would not be hijacked by North Korea's leaders.   remained defiant during its celebration Sunday in the face of the criticism for the nation's pursuit of nuclear delivery capability last week . gave his first formal address on Sunday in the aftermath of Friday's failed attempt to launch a multistage rocket into orbit and in honor of the anniversary of 100th birthday.
Revised:  In the statement, China expressed impatience with its neighbor and said China's foreign policy toward North Korea would not be hijacked by North Korea's leaders. remained defiant during its celebration Sunday . gave his first formal address on Sunday in the aftermath of Friday's failed attempt to launch a multistage rocket into orbit and in honor of the anniversary of 100th birthday.
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Original:  The United Nations criticized North Korea on Friday for a satellite launch that member states saw as a "provocative" move, which followed shortly after the country's launch.
Revised:  The criticized North Korea on Friday for a satellite launch that member states saw as a "provocative" move, which followed shortly after the country's launch.
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Original:  The United States halted its food aid after the launch.
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Original:  On Tuesday, China delivered another stern warning to the nation through its party newspaper Global Times.
Revised:  Also on Tuesday, China delivered another stern warning to the nation through its party newspaper Global Times.
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Original: Thirty metre high plumes of smoke are rsisng into the air and the billows can be seen from all over Istanbul, which indicates the severity of the inferno.
Revised: Thirty metre high plumes of smoke are risisng into the air and the billows can be seen from all over Istanbul, which indicates the severity of the inferno.
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Original:  Sveral fire-engines and ambulances are rsuhing to the scene even as aircraft overhead try to douse the fire in an attempt to prevent it from spreading to a hotel nearby.
Revised:  Several fire-engines and ambulances are rsuhing to the scene even as aircraft overhead try to douse the fire in an attempt to prevent it from spreading to a hotel nearby.
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Original:  Sveral fire-engines and ambulances are rsuhing to the scene even as aircraft overhead try to douse the fire in an attempt to prevent it from spreading to a hotel nearby.
Revised:  Sveral fire-engines and ambulances are rushing to the scene even as aircraft overhead try to douse the fire in an attempt to prevent it from spreading to a hotel nearby.
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Original: Thirty metre high plumes of smoke are risisng into the air and the billows can be seen from all over Istanbul, which indicates the severity of the inferno.
Revised: Thirty metre high plumes of smoke are rising into the air and the billows can be seen from all over Istanbul, which indicates the severity of the inferno.
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Original: A huge fire which started in the cargo area has engulfed part of Turkey's Ataturk International Airport in Istanbul.
Revised: A huge fire which started in the cargo area has engulfed part of Turkey's Atatürk International Airport in Istanbul.
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Original:  There is some speculation that this might have been a terrorist attack.
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Original: A huge fire that started in the cargo area  has engulfed part of  Turkey's Atatürk International Airport in Istanbul.
Revised: A huge fart that started in the cargo area has engulfed part of Turkey's Atatürk International Airport in Istanbul.
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Original: A huge fart that started in the cargo area of New Hampshire has engulfed part of IRAN with it's massive amount of methane gas.
Revised: A huge fire that started in the cargo area of New Hampshire has engulfed part of IRAN with it's massive amount of methane gas.
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Original: A huge fart that started in the cargo area of New Hampshire has engulfed part of IRAN with it's massive amount of methane gas.
Revised: A huge fart that started in the cargo area has engulfed part of IRAN with it's massive amount of methane gas.
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Original:  A complete and nearly intact skeleton of a Mammoth has been found in Krasnoyarsk, Russia off the shores of a small lake.
Revised:  A complete and nearly intact skeleton of a mammoth has been found in Krasnoyarsk, Russia off the shores of a small lake.
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Original:  The skeleton became visable when waters from a recent flood receded.
Revised:  The skeleton became visible when waters from a recent flood receded.
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Original: O'Connell who wrote the law when he was a state legislator in 1999, said the test is an important ingrediant in California's school reform efforts.
Revised: O'Connell who wrote the law when he was a state legislator in 1999, said the test is an important ingredient in California's school reform efforts.
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Original:  "We know, and look forward to sharing with the curt , that as a result of the exit exam, our students have studied harder and learned more than they would have otherwise," he said.
Revised:  "We know, and look forward to sharing with the court , that as a result of the exit exam, our students have studied harder and learned more than they would have otherwise," he said.
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Original:  Ambassador Stephen Evans escaped injury after a military transport plane he was travelling in caught fire at an airstrip in southern Afghanistan |Southern Afghanistan
Revised:  Ambassador Stephen Evans escaped injury after a military transport plane he was travelling in caught fire at an airstrip in southern Afghanistan 
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