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Original:  The Israeli military had begun a massive air assault on Hamas forces and government officials for several days before troops entered the Strip.
Revised:  The Israeli military began a massive air assault on Hamas forces and government officials for several days before troops entered the Strip.
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Original:  The Israeli military had begun a massive air assault on Hamas forces and government officials for several days before troops entered the Strip.
Revised:  The Israeli military had begun a massive air assault on Hamas forces and government officials several days before troops entered the Strip.
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Original:  The objective of this stage is to destroy the terrorist infrastructure of the Hamas in the area of operation, while taking control of some of rocket launching area used by the Hamas, in order to greatly reduce the quantity of rockets fired at Israel and Israeli civilians," said a spokesman for the Israeli Ministry of Foreign Affairs in a statement on their website .
Revised:  The objective of this stage is to destroy the terrorist infrastructure of the Hamas in the area of operation, while taking control of some of rocket launching area used by the Hamas, in order to greatly reduce the quantity of rockets fired at Israel and Israeli civilians," claimed a spokesman for the Israeli Ministry of Foreign Affairs in a statement on their website .
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Original:  The Israeli military began a massive air assault on Hamas forces and government officials several days before troops entered the Strip.
Revised:  The Israeli military began a massive air assault on Gaza several days before troops entered the Strip.
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Original:  Anyone who hides a terrorist or weapons in his house is considered a terrorist , " added the statement
Revised:  Anyone who hides a terrorist or weapons in his house is considered a terrorist " added the statement
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Original:  The objective of this stage is to destroy the terrorist infrastructure of the Hamas in the area of operation, while taking control of some of rocket launching area used by the Hamas, in order to greatly reduce the quantity of rockets fired at Israel and Israeli civilians," claimed a spokesman for the Israeli Ministry of Foreign Affairs in a written statement .
Revised:  The objective of this stage is to destroy the terrorist infrastructure of the Hamas in the area of operation, while taking control of some of rocket launching area used by the Hamas, in order to greatly reduce the quantity of rockets fired at Israel and Israeli civilians," said a spokesman for the Israeli Ministry of Foreign Affairs in a written statement .
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Original:  Many Hamas forces and government officials has been targeted, yet the operation also resulted in high civillian casualties of Palestinians.
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Original:  Reports state that Israeli forces are engaging in heavy gun battles with Hamas troops as they enter the city.
Revised:  Reports state that Israeli forces are engaging in gun battles with Hamas troops as they enter the city.
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Original:  Israeli government and Israeli Army claimed, they do not want civilians to be harmed during the assault, earlier dropping leaflets signed by the commander of the Israeli military, saying in Arabic they are "obliged to respond quickly and work from inside your residential area" because of "the activity of terrorist groups", from the sky warning residents to evacuate their homes.
Revised:  The military does not want civilians to be harmed during the assault, earlier dropping leaflets signed by the commander of the Israeli military, saying in Arabic they are "obliged to respond quickly and work from inside your residential area" because of "the activity of terrorist groups", from the sky warning residents to evacuate their homes.
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Original:  Israeli government and Israeli Army claimed, they do not want civilians to be harmed during the assault, earlier dropping leaflets signed by the commander of the Israeli military, saying in Arabic they are "obliged to respond quickly and work from inside your residential area" because of "the activity of terrorist groups", from the sky warning residents to evacuate their homes.
Revised:  Israeli government and Israeli Army claimed, they do not want civilians to be harmed during the assault, earlier dropping leaflets from the sky warning residents to evacuate their homes.
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Original:  Anyone who hides a terrorist or weapons in his house is considered a terrorist  " Israeli army declared
Revised:  Anyone who hides a terrorist or weapons in his house is considered a terrorist , " Israeli army declared
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Original: Iranian Parliament At first, after the earliest attacks, the government seemed to blame the Mojahedin-e-Khalq (MeK) organization.
Revised:  At first, after the earliest attacks, the government seemed to blame the Mojahedin-e-Khalq (MeK) organization.
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Original:  The attack comes during a Shia pilgrimage where many Iranians were celebrating the Shia holy Day of Ashura    .
Revised:  The attack comes during a Shia pilgrimage where many Iranians were celebrating the Shia holy Day of Ashura . .
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Original: On Friday in Chicago, Illinois, 4,000 people marched from Tribune Plaza to the Israeli Consulate demanding an end to the occupation of Palestine, and to the raids on Gaza.
Revised: On Friday in Chicago, 4,000 people marched from Tribune Plaza to the Israeli Consulate demanding an end to the occupation of Palestine, and to the raids on Gaza.
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Original:  On Saturday, thousands of protesters in Indonesia asked the Indonesian government to send troops to Gaza to fight against the Israelis who they called a "terrorist" force.
Revised:  On Saturday, thousands of protesters in Indonesia asked the Indonesian government to send troops to Gaza to fight against the Israelis who they called a “terrorist” force.
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Original:  In addition 10,000 people marched past  Prime Minister Gordon Brown's residence in London, England, hurling hundreds of shoes at his home.
Revised:  In addition 10,000 people marched past Prime Minister Gordon Brown's residence in London, hurling hundreds of shoes at his home.
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Original:  Louis Michel, the European Union's humanitarian aid commissioner said in a statement on Sunday that " blocking access to people who are suffering and dying is also a breach of humanitarian law.
Revised:  Louis Michel, the European Union's humanitarian aid commissioner said in a statement on Sunday that “ blocking access to people who are suffering and dying is also a breach of humanitarian law.
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Original:  " The statement promised 3 million euros of emergency EU aid to the people of Gaza.
Revised:  ” The statement promised 3 million euros of emergency EU aid to the people of Gaza.
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Original:  Four Israelis were killed in that same time by Hamas rockets fired out of Gaza  
Revised:  Four Israelis were killed in that same time by Hamas rockets fired out of Gaza . 
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Original:  Four Israelis were killed in that same time by Hamas rockets fired out of Gaza  
Revised:  Four Israelis were killed in that same time by Hamas rockets fired out of Gaza =
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Original:  [[File:Lafayette_Regional_Airport.jpg|Lafayette Regional Airport (main terminal from the tarmac) home of the largest helicopter company in the world, PHI, Inc. (formerly Petroleum Helicopters International)]] Rescue workers at Bob's Bayou Black Marina in Gibson, Louisiana, is an unincorporated community in Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana, USA, went to the scene, for emergency operations.
Revised:  [[File:Lafayette_Regional_Airport.jpg|Lafayette Regional Airport - home of the largest helicopter company in the world, PHI, Inc. (formerly Petroleum Helicopters International)]] Rescue workers at Bob's Bayou Black Marina in Gibson, Louisiana, is an unincorporated community in Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana, USA, went to the scene, for emergency operations.
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Original:   [[File:Lafayette_Regional_Airport.jpg|Lafayette Regional Airport - home of the largest helicopter company in the world, PHI, Inc. (formerly Petroleum Helicopters International)]] Rescue workers at Bob's Bayou Black Marina in Gibson, Louisiana, is an unincorporated community in Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana, USA, went to the scene, for emergency operations.
Revised:  [[File:Lafayette_Regional_Airport.jpg|Lafayette Regional Airport - home of the largest helicopter company in the world, PHI, Inc. (formerly Petroleum Helicopters International)]] Rescue workers at Bob's Bayou Black Marina in Gibson, Louisiana, an unincorporated community in Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana, USA, went to the scene, for emergency operations.
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Original:  The Terrebonne Sheriff’s Office Water Patrol and a Coast Guard helicopter also coordinated in search of bodies in waters near Bayou Penchant, a soupy, grassy area which is only accessible by airboat.
Revised:  The Terrebonne Sheriff’s Office Water Patrol and a Coast Guard helicopter also cooperated in search of bodies in waters near Bayou Penchant, a soupy, grassy area which is only accessible by airboat.
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Original:  It provides helicopter services to oil and gas businesses and also flies medical helicopters   .
Revised:  It provides helicopter services to oil and gas businesses and also flies medical helicopters . .
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Original: File:Map_of_Louisiana_highlighting_Terrebonne_Parish.svg|This is a locator map showing the site of the crash - Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana.
Revised: File:Map_of_Louisiana_highlighting_Terrebonne_Parish.svg|This is a locator map showing the crash site - Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana.
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Original:  Helicopter owner PHI then called the Coast Guard, informing about a distress call from its helicopter.
Revised:  Helicopter owner PHI earlier called the Coast Guard, informing about a distress call from its helicopter.
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Original:  File:Lafayette_Regional_Airport.jpg|Lafayette Regional Airport (main terminal from the tarmac) home of the largest helicopter company in the world, PHI, Inc. (formerly Petroleum Helicopters International) Rescue workers at Bob's Bayou Black Marina in Gibson, Louisiana, an unincorporated community in Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana, arrived at boat launch to coordinate recovery efforts for the bodies in the wilderness.
Revised:  Rescue workers at Bob's Bayou Black Marina in Gibson, Louisiana, an unincorporated community in Terrebonne Parish, Louisiana, arrived at boat launch to coordinate recovery efforts for the bodies in the wilderness.
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Original:  The Sam Houston National Forest crash killed the pilot, paramedic, nurse and a patient who was being transferred from Huntsville to Houston
Revised:  The Sam Houston National Forest accident killed the pilot, paramedic, nurse and a patient who was being transferred from Huntsville to Houston
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Original:  The students are studying at the Imperial College London, and had been researching fault lines in the remote western region of Xinjiang, where anger against Chinese rule caused the 2008 deadly attacks.
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Original:  The students were researching earthquake activity, fault lines and making maps in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, and where anger against Chinese rule caused the 2008 deadly attacks .
Revised:  The students were researching earthquake activity, fault lines and making maps in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, and where anger against Chinese rule caused the deadly attacks in 2008.
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Original:  The students were also gathering data in several regions, including Kashgar, the ancient Silk Road trading post, and an oasis city in the Xinjiang Uyghur Autonomous Region of the People's Republic of China.
Revised:  The students were gathering additional data in several regions, including Kashgar, the ancient Silk Road trading post, and an oasis city in the Xinjiang Uyghur Autonomous Region of the People's Republic of China.
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Original:  Thereafter, their equipments , including GPS devices, survey results  and data, were seized.
Revised:  Thereafter, their equipment , including GPS devices, survey results and data, were seized.
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Original:  Thereafter, their equipments , including GPS devices, survey results  and data, were seized.
Revised:  Thereafter, their equipments , including GPS devices, survey results , and data, were seized.
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Original:  The indictment was based on the crime of suspicion of "endangering state security."
Revised:  The indictments were based on suspicion of "endangering state security."
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Original:  The students were researching earthquake activity, fault lines and making maps in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, and where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
Revised:  In addition to making maps, the students were researching earthquake activity, fault lines and making maps in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, and where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
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Original:  The students were researching earthquake activity, fault lines and making maps in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, and where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
Revised:  The students were researching fault lines and making maps in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, and where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
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Original:  The students were researching earthquake activity, fault lines and making maps in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, and where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
Revised:  The students were researching earthquake activity, fault lines and making maps in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
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Original:  In addition to making maps, the students were researching fault lines and earthquake activity in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
Revised:  In addition to making maps, the students were researching faults and earthquake activity in Xinjiang, which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country, where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
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Original:  Of the three students, two of them, a PhD student aged 23 , and a Master of Science student aged 22, went to Aksu Prefecture for their research.
Revised:  Of the three students, two of them, a PhD student aged 23 , and a Master in Science student aged 22, went to Aksu Prefecture for their research.
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Original:  In September, State Security Bureau officials had investigated the students at a hotel for several hours.
Revised:  In September, State Security Bureau officials investigated the students at a hotel for several hours.
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Original:  In September, State Security Bureau officials had investigated the students at a hotel for several hours.
Revised:  In September, State Security Bureau officials had investigated the students at a hotel for many hours.
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Original: Under Dr. Jian Guo Liu, the student' s supervisor at Imperial College, they also had been in the poor desert village of Keping, where in May local authorities burned the local mosque due to "unlawful religious activities".
Revised: Under Dr. Jian Guo Liu, the students' supervisor at Imperial College, they also had been in the poor desert village of Keping, where in May local authorities burned the local mosque due to "unlawful religious activities".
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Original:  In addition to making maps, the students were researching fault lines and earthquake activity in Xinjiang , which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country , where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
Revised:  In addition to making maps, the students were researching fault lines and earthquake activity in Xinjiang — a tense Muslim province to the west of the country , where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
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Original:  In addition to making maps, the students were researching fault lines and earthquake activity in Xinjiang , which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country , where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
Revised:  In addition to making maps, the students were researching fault lines and earthquake activity in Xinjiang , which is a tense Muslim province to the west of the country where anger against Chinese rule sparked deadly attacks in 2008.
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Original: border|200px|left Over 100 Australian Jews, including two authors and a federal minister, have condemned Israel's invasion of Gaza .
Revised: border|200px|left Over 100 Australian Jews, including two authors and a federal minister, have condemned Israel's invasion of the Gaza Strip .
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Original:  The group acknowledged Israels right to defend it self.
Revised:  The group acknowledged Israel's right to defend it self.
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Original:  "However, since Palestinians have no means of self-defence against the most powerful military force in the Middle East , we particularly call on Israel to end its brutal assault on the vulnerable Palestinian people of Gaza and to reconsider its rejection of the UN Security Council's call for a ceasefire," the statement said.
Revised:  "However, since Palestinians have no means of self-defence against the most powerful military force in the Middle East . We particularly call on Israel to end its brutal assault on the vulnerable Palestinian people of Gaza and to reconsider its rejection of the UN Security Council's call for a ceasefire," the statement said.
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Original:  "However, since Palestinians have no means of self-defence against the most powerful military force in the Middle East , we particularly call on Israel to end its brutal assault on the vulnerable Palestinian people of Gaza and to reconsider its rejection of the UN Security Council's call for a ceasefire," the statement said.
Revised:  "However, since Palestinians have no means of self-defence against the most powerful military force in the Middle East , we particularly call on Israel to end its brutal assault on the vulnerable Palestinian people of Gaza and to reconsider its rejection of the United Nations Security Council's call for a ceasefire," the statement said.
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Original:  "History has demonstrated that military punishment has never broken the spirit of a people or produced peace," it said . "They propose that the population of southern Israel must continue to live under constant rocket bombardment, opposing all practical efforts to actually invoke the right to self-defence the signatories say they recognise ," he said
Revised:  "History has demonstrated that military punishment has never broken the spirit of a people or produced peace," added the statement . "They propose that the population of southern Israel must continue to live under constant rocket bombardment, opposing all practical efforts to actually invoke the right to self-defence the signatories say they recognise ," he said
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Original:  "History has demonstrated that military punishment has never broken the spirit of a people or produced peace," it said . "They propose that the population of southern Israel must continue to live under constant rocket bombardment, opposing all practical efforts to actually invoke the right to self-defence the signatories say they recognise ," he said
Revised:  "History has demonstrated that military punishment has never broken the spirit of a people or produced peace," it said . "They propose that the population of southern Israel must continue to live under constant rocket bombardment, opposing all practical efforts to actually invoke the right to self-defence the signatories say they recognize ," he said
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Original: Palastinian medical officials report that a UN school in Gaza City, which was being used as a shelter for civilians, took a direct hit from an Israeli tank, killing more than 30 Palastinans on the 11th day of the assault.
Revised: Palestinian medical officials report that a UN school in Gaza City, which was being used as a shelter for civilians, took a direct hit from an Israeli tank, killing more than 30 Palastinans on the 11th day of the assault.
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Original: Palastinian medical officials report that a UN school in Gaza City, which was being used as a shelter for civilians, took a direct hit from an Israeli tank, killing more than 30 Palastinans on the 11th day of the assault.
Revised: Palastinian medical officials report that a UN school in Gaza City, which was being used as a shelter for civilians, took a direct hit from an Israeli tank, killing more than 30 Palestinians on the 11th day of the assault.
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Original: Palestinian medical officials report that a UN school in Gaza City, which was being used as a shelter for civilians, took a direct hit from an Israeli tank, killing more than 30 Palestinians on the 11th day of the assault.
Revised: Palestinian medical officials report that a United Nations school in Gaza City, which was being used as a shelter for civilians, took a direct hit from an Israeli tank, killing more than 30 Palestinians on the 11th day of the assault.
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Original: 200px The Australian Tax Office (ATO) has warned against a fraudulent email claiminf to be from the ATO.
Revised: 200px The Australian Tax Office (ATO) has warned against a fraudulent email claiming to be from the ATO.
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Original:  “ People should be wary of unsolicited emails claiming to be from the Tax Office," says Tax Commissioner Michael D’Ascenzo.
Revised:  " People should be wary of unsolicited emails claiming to be from the Tax Office," says Tax Commissioner Michael D’Ascenzo.
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Original:  Anyone who believes they may have fallen victim to this scam are ureged to contact their credit card provider.
Revised:  Anyone who believes they may have fallen victim to this scam are urged to contact their credit card provider.
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Original:  UN chief Ban Ki-moon has been quoted as saying that he was “deeply dismayed” by the strikes on the schools and calling them “totally unacceptable”.
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Original: “ I call on the council to take the first necessary step to save my people in Gaza: a resolution calling for an immediate full cessation of Israeli aggression, ” he told the 15-member council.
Revised: " I call on the council to take the first necessary step to save my people in Gaza: a resolution calling for an immediate full cessation of Israeli aggression, ” he told the 15-member council.
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Original: “ I call on the council to take the first necessary step to save my people in Gaza: a resolution calling for an immediate full cessation of Israeli aggression, ” he told the 15-member council.
Revised: “ I call on the council to take the first necessary step to save my people in Gaza: a resolution calling for an immediate full cessation of Israeli aggression, " he told the 15-member council.
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Original:  “ [Egypt] invites the Israelis and Palestinians for an urgent meeting to reach arrangements and guarantees that would not allow the repeat of the current escalation, ” Mr. Mubarak said.
Revised:  " [Egypt] invites the Israelis and Palestinians for an urgent meeting to reach arrangements and guarantees that would not allow the repeat of the current escalation, ” Mr. Mubarak said.
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