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Original:  Alternative terminology There is no global consensus on a single term and depending on the culture, country and sector, the same or very similar definitions are used to describe the terms apprenticeship, internship  and trainee-ship.
Revised:  Alternative terminology There is no global consensus on a single term for apprenticeship. Depending on the culture, country and sector, the same or very similar definitions are used to describe the terms apprenticeship, internship and trainee-ship.
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Original:  Alternative terminology There is no global consensus on a single term and depending on the culture, country and sector, the same or very similar definitions are used to describe the terms apprenticeship, internship  and trainee-ship.
Revised:  Alternative terminology There is no global consensus on a single term and depending on the culture, country and sector, the same or similar definitions are used to describe the terms apprenticeship, internship and trainee-ship.
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Original:  Alternative terminology There is no global consensus on a single term and depending on the culture, country and sector, the same or very similar definitions are used to describe the terms apprenticeship, internship  and trainee-ship.
Revised:  Alternative terminology There is no global consensus on a single term and depending on the culture, country and sector, the same or very similar definitions are used to describe the terms apprenticeship, internship , and trainee-ship.
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Original:  These last two terms seem to be preferred in the health sector – examples of this being internships in medicine for physicians and trainee-ships for nurses – and western countries.
Revised:  The latter two terms may be preferred in the health sector – examples of this being internships in medicine for physicians and trainee-ships for nurses – and western countries.
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Original:  These last two terms seem to be preferred in the health sector – examples of this being internships in medicine for physicians and trainee-ships for nurses – and western countries.
Revised:  These last two terms seem to be preferred in the health sector . One example is internships in medicine for physicians and trainee-ships for nurses – and western countries.
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Original:  Some non-European countries adapt European apprenticeship practices . Malaysia, for instance, has collaborated with German industry to build its technical professions .
Revised:  Some non-European countries adapt European apprenticeship practices .
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Original:     Types of apprenticeships alt=|450x450px|Typology of Apprenticeships Apprenticeships can be divided into two main categories: Independent and Cooperative.
Revised:  Apprenticeship was adopted into military of the West African kingdom of Dahomey. Soldiers in the army were recruited as young as seven or eight years old, as they initially served as shield carriers for regular soldiers. After years of apprenticeship and military experience, the recruits were allowed to join the army as regular soldiers. With a combination of lifelong military experience and monetary incentives, a cohesive and well-disciplined military emerged in the Kingdom of Dahomey. Types of apprenticeships alt=|450x450px|Typology of Apprenticeships Apprenticeships can be divided into two main categories: Independent and Cooperative.
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Original:  Because the tubular cells continually replace themselves, the overall prognosis for ATN is quite good if the  cause is corrected, and recovery is likely within 7 to 21 days.
Revised:  Because the tubular cells continually replace themselves, the overall prognosis for ATN is quite good if the underlying cause is corrected, and recovery is likely within 7 to 21 days.
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Original: The NIFSTD, or NIF Standard Ontology contains many of the terms, synonyms and abbreviations useful for neuroscience, as well as dynamic categories such as defined cell classes based on various properties like neuron by neurotrasmitter or by circuit role or drugs of abuse according to the National Institutes on Drug Abuse.
Revised: The NIFSTD, or NIF Standard Ontology contains many of the terms, synonyms and abbreviations useful for neuroscience, as well as dynamic categories such as defined cell classes based on various properties like neuron by neurotransmitter or by circuit role or drugs of abuse according to the National Institutes on Drug Abuse.
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Original:  Data analysis service F1000 Posters Storage service resource, Narrative resource, Analysis service resource Expression Atlas of the Marmoset Data set, Expression atlas ExactAntigen / Labome Database, Reagent supplier, Service resource EU Clinical Trials Register Database EEGbase Data repository, Database EcoCyc Database DrugBank Database Drug Related Gene Database Database, Data repository Disorders index from the National Institute of Neurological Disorders and Stroke (NINDS)
Revised:  Data analysis service F1000 Posters Storage service resource, Narrative resource, Analysis service resource Expression Atlas of the Marmoset Data set, Expression atlas EU Clinical Trials Register Database EEGbase Data repository, Database EcoCyc Database DrugBank Database Drug Related Gene Database Database, Data repository Disorders index from the National Institute of Neurological Disorders and Stroke (NINDS)
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Original:  After the game Chalali called Ian Durrant a diving prick, Walter Smith an old dickhead and Nacho Novo a prody fuck before belting out a chorus of we all agree Despite his heroics Craig Brown released Chalali because he felt he was too good to stay at the club Algeria
Revised:  After the game Chalali called Ian Durrant a diving prick, Walter Smith an old dickhead and Nacho Novo a prody fuck before belting out a chorus of we all agree Algeria
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Original: Mohamed “The Algerian Assasin” Chalali (born 4 April 1989) is an Algerian footballer.
Revised: Mohamed Chalali (born 4 April 1989) is an Algerian footballer.
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Original:  The variation of the microwave emission from Uranus is probably caused by a changes in the deep tropospheric circulation, because thick polar clouds and haze may inhibit convection.
Revised:  The variation of the microwave emission from Uranus is probably caused by changes in the deep tropospheric circulation, because thick polar clouds and haze may inhibit convection.
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Original:  Finally in the 1990s, as Uranus moved away from its solstice, Hubble and ground based telescopes revealed that the south polar cap darkened noticeably (except the southern collar, which remained bright), whereas the northern hemisphere demonstrated increasing activity, such as cloud formations and stronger winds, having bolstered expectations that it would brighten soon.
Revised:  Finally in the 1990s, as Uranus moved away from its solstice, Hubble and ground-based telescopes revealed that the south polar cap darkened noticeably (except the southern collar, which remained bright), whereas the northern hemisphere demonstrated increasing activity, such as cloud formations and stronger winds, having bolstered expectations that it would brighten soon.
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Original: 300px|Uranus' s southern hemisphere in approximate natural colour (left) and in higher wavelengths (right), showing its faint cloud bands and atmospheric "hood" as seen by Voyager 2 The climate of Uranus is heavily influenced by both its lack of internal heat, which limits atmospheric activity, and by its extreme axial tilt, which induces intense seasonal variation.
Revised: 300px|Uranus' southern hemisphere in approximate natural colour (left) and in higher wavelengths (right), showing its faint cloud bands and atmospheric "hood" as seen by Voyager 2 The climate of Uranus is heavily influenced by both its lack of internal heat, which limits atmospheric activity, and by its extreme axial tilt, which induces intense seasonal variation.
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Original:  Uranus' s atmosphere is remarkably bland in comparison to the other gas giants which it otherwise closely resembles.
Revised:  Uranus' atmosphere is remarkably bland in comparison to the other gas giants which it otherwise closely resembles.
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Original: Determining the nature of this seasonal variation is difficult because good data on Uranus's atmosphere has existed for less than 84 Earth years, or one full Uranian year  . A number of discoveries have however been made.
Revised: Determining the nature of this seasonal variation is difficult because good data on Uranus's atmosphere has existed for less than one full Uranian year . A number of discoveries have however been made.
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Original: Determining the nature of this seasonal variation is difficult because good data on Uranus's atmosphere has existed for less than 84 Earth years, or one full Uranian year  . A number of discoveries have however been made.
Revised: Determining the nature of this seasonal variation is difficult because good data on Uranus's atmosphere has existed for less than 84 Earth years, or one full Uranian year (84 Earth years) . A number of discoveries have however been made.
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Original:  So Uranus appeared to be asymmetric: bright near the south pole and uniformly dark in the region north of the southern collar.
Revised:  Thus, Uranus appeared to be asymmetric: bright near the south pole and uniformly dark in the region north of the southern collar.
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Original:  Uranus' atmosphere is remarkably bland in comparison to the other gas giants which it otherwise closely resembles.
Revised:  Uranus' atmosphere is remarkably bland in comparison to the other giant planets which it otherwise closely resembles.
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Original: Cyclospasm refers to the contraction of the ciliary muscle in the eye, in the accommodation of focus for near vision.
Revised: Cyclospasm is the contraction of the ciliary muscle in the eye, in the accommodation of focus for near vision.
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Original:  Cyclospasm may also exert tensions on the trabecular meshwork, opening the pores  facilitating outflow of the aqeous humour into the canal of Schlemm.
Revised:  Cyclospasm may also exert tensions on the trabecular meshwork, opening the pores and facilitating outflow of the aqeous humour into the canal of Schlemm.
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Original:  Cyclospasm may also exert tensions on the trabecular meshwork, opening the pores  facilitating outflow of the aqeous humour into the canal of Schlemm.
Revised:  Cyclospasm may also exert tensions on the trabecular meshwork, opening the pores facilitating outflow of the aqueous humour into the canal of Schlemm.
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Original:  The increase in aqeous humour outflow is desirable for patients with glaucom 
Revised:  The increase in aqueous humour outflow is desirable for patients with glaucom 
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Original:  The increase in aqeous humour outflow is desirable for patients with glaucom 
Revised:  The increase in aqeous humour outflow is desirable for patients with glaucoma. 
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Original:  Dude Zargerna 1744-1753 Head of General 1753-1754 Luksom II 1753-1754 Heras I of Sardinia 1754-1775 Hosér III of Palermo 1775-1775 (c. 15 Jan-3 Nov) Vacant 1775-1777 James Kurker 1777-1777 (c. 31 Dec-6 Hours) Vacant 1777-1895 Luksom III 1895-1901 Heras II 1901-1978 Mah I 1978-2020 Hosér IV 2020-Present (c. 19 July-40 Minute 
Revised:  Dude Zargerna 1744-1753 Head of General 1753-1754 Luksom II 1753-1754 Heras I of Sardinia 1754-1775 Hosér III of Palermo 1775-1775 (c. 15 Jan-3 Nov) Vacant 1775-1777 James Kurker 1777-1777 (c. 31 Dec-6 Hours) Vacant 1777-1895 Luksom III 1895-1901 Heras II 1901-1978 Mah I 1978-2020 Hosér IV 2020-Present (c. 19 July-40 Minute )
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Original:  Dude Zargerna 1744-1753 Head of General 1753-1754 Luksom II 1753-1754 Heras I of Sardinia 1754-1775 Hosér III of Palermo 1775-1775 (c. 15 Jan-3 Nov) Vacant 1775-1777 James Kurker 1777-1777 (c. 31 Dec-6 Hours) Vacant 1777-1895 Luksom III 1895-1901 Heras II 1901-1978 Mah I 1978-2020 Hosér IV 2020-Present (c. 19 July-42 Minute )
Revised:  Dude Zargerna 1744-1753 Head of General 1753-1754 Luksom II 1753-1754 Heras I of Sardinia 1754-1775 Hosér III of Palermo 1775-1775 (c. 15 Jan-3 Nov) Vacant 1775-1777 James Kurker 1777-1777 (c. 31 Dec-6 Hours) Vacant 1777-1895 Luksom III 1895-1901 Heras II 1901-1978 Mah I 1978-2020 Hosér IV 2020-Present (c. 19 July-8 Hours )
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Original:  Dude Zargerna 1744-1753 Head of General 1753-1754 Luksom II 1753-1754 Heras I of Sardinia 1754-1775 Hosér III of Palermo 1775-1775 (c. 15 Jan-3 Nov) Vacant 1775-1777 James Kurker 1777-1777 (c. 31 Dec-6 Hours) Vacant 1777-1895 Luksom III 1895-1901 Heras II 1901-1978 Mah I 1978-2020 Hosér IV 2020-Present (c. 19 July-8 Hours) State Cardinal 2020-Present Hosér IV 2020- Present c. 19 July
Revised:  Dude Zargerna 1744-1753 Head of General 1753-1754 Luksom II 1753-1754 Heras I of Sardinia 1754-1775 Hosér III of Palermo 1775-1775 (c. 15 Jan-3 Nov) Vacant 1775-1777 James Kurker 1777-1777 (c. 31 Dec-6 Hours) Vacant 1777-1895 Luksom III 1895-1901 Heras II 1901-1978 Mah I 1978-2020 Hosér IV 2020-Present (c. 19 July-8 Hours) State Cardinal 2020-2020 Hosér IV 2020- Present c. 19 July
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Original:  Dude Zargerna 1744-1753 Head of General 1753-1754 Luksom II 1753-1754 Heras I of Sardinia 1754-1775 Hosér III of Palermo 1775-1775 (c. 15 Jan-3 Nov) Vacant 1775-1777 James Kurker 1777-1777 (c. 31 Dec-6 Hours) Vacant 1777-1895 Luksom III 1895-1901 Heras II 1901-1978 Mah I 1978-2020 Hosér IV 2020-Present (c. 19 July-8 Hours) State Cardinal 2020-Present Hosér IV 2020- Present c. 19 July
Revised:  Dude Zargerna 1744-1753 Head of General 1753-1754 Luksom II 1753-1754 Heras I of Sardinia 1754-1775 Hosér III of Palermo 1775-1775 (c. 15 Jan-3 Nov) Vacant 1775-1777 James Kurker 1777-1777 (c. 31 Dec-6 Hours) Vacant 1777-1895 Luksom III 1895-1901 Heras II 1901-1978 Mah I 1978-2020 Hosér IV 2020-Present (c. 19 July-8 Hours) State Cardinal 2020-Present Hosér IV 2020-2020 c. 19 July
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Original: People from the Kingdom of Bohemia Category:Czech Social Democratic Party politicians Category:  Communist Party of Czechoslovakia politicians Category:Czechoslovak diplomats Category:Charter 77 signatories Category: Permanent Representatives of Czechoslovakia to the United Nations Category:Ambassadors of Czechoslovakia to the United Kingdom Category: Foreign ministers of Czechoslovakia Category:Government ministers of Czechoslovakia Category:People of the Velvet Revoluti
Revised: People from the Kingdom of Bohemia Category:Czech Social Democratic Party politicians Category: Communist Party of Czechoslovakia politicians Category:Czechoslovak diplomats Category:Charter 77 signatories Category: Permanent Representatives of Czechoslovakia to the United Nations Category:Ambassadors of Czechoslovakia to the United Kingdom Category: Czechoslovak diplomats Category:Charter 77 signatories Category:People of the Velvet Revoluti
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Original:  He grew up on his mother's reservation, the Beaver Lake Cree Nation, but is a member of the Saddle Lake Cree Nation in Alberta.
Revised:  He grew up on his birth parents reservation, the Beaver Lake Cree Nation, but is a member of the Saddle Lake Cree Nation in Alberta.
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Original:  Pruden has also contributed to SpeakOUT: LGBT Voices for Recovery, a program of the LGBT community center in New York City.
Revised:  Pruden has also headed SpeakOUT: LGBT Voices for Recovery, a program of the LGBT community center in New York City.
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Original:  Pruden has also contributed to SpeakOUT: LGBT Voices for Recovery, a program of the LGBT community center in New York City.
Revised:  Pruden has also contributed to SpeakOUT: LGBT Voices for Recovery, a program of the LGBT Community Center in New York City.
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Original:  As the project's coordinator he oversaw a national program designed to increase awareness of the issues that confront LGBT people struggling to recover from alcohol and substance abuse . Pruden is an experienced political person with strong feelings and has worked on many political campaigns including Hillary Clinton’s 2000 Senate race;
Revised:  As the project's Coordinator, he oversaw a national program designed to increase awareness of the issues that confront LGBT people struggling to recover from alcohol and substance abuse . Pruden is an experienced political person with strong feelings and has worked on many political campaigns including Hillary Clinton’s 2000 Senate race;
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Original:  As the project's coordinator he oversaw a national program designed to increase awareness of the issues that confront LGBT people struggling to recover from alcohol and substance abuse . Pruden is an experienced political person with strong feelings and has worked on many political campaigns including Hillary Clinton’s 2000 Senate race;
Revised:  As the project's coordinator he oversaw a national program designed to increase awareness of the issues that confront LGBT people in recover from alcohol and substance abuse . Pruden is an experienced political person with strong feelings and has worked on many political campaigns including Hillary Clinton’s 2000 Senate race;
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Original:  As the project's coordinator he oversaw a national program designed to increase awareness of the issues that confront LGBT people struggling to recover from alcohol and substance abuse . Pruden is an experienced political person with strong feelings and has worked on many political campaigns including Hillary Clinton’s 2000 Senate race;
Revised:  As the project's coordinator he oversaw a national program designed to increase awareness of the issues that confront LGBT people struggling to recover from alcohol and substance use . Pruden is an experienced political person with strong feelings and has worked on many political campaigns including Hillary Clinton’s 2000 Senate race;
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Original:  As the project's coordinator he oversaw a national program designed to increase awareness of the issues that confront LGBT people struggling to recover from alcohol and substance abuse . Pruden is an experienced political person with strong feelings and has worked on many political campaigns including Hillary Clinton’s 2000 Senate race;
Revised:  As the project's coordinator he oversaw a national program designed to increase awareness of the issues that confront LGBT people struggling to recover from alcohol and substance abuse . Pruden is an experienced community organizer and has worked on many political campaigns including Hillary Clinton’s 2000 Senate race;
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Original:  He has also served as chief of staff for Craig M. Johnson, state legislator when he was in the Nassau County Legislature.
Revised:  He has also served as Chief of Staff for Craig M. Johnson, state legislator when he was in the Nassau County Legislature.
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Original:  He has also served as chief of staff for Craig M. Johnson, state legislator when he was in the Nassau County Legislature.
Revised:  He has also served as chief of staff for Craig M. Johnson, a former State Legislator, when Johnson was in the Nassau County Legislature.
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Original: File:February 2015 PACHA-241 (16353105328).jpg|300px|Harlan Pruden at the February 2015 PACHA]] Harlan Pruden is a First Nations Cree scholar and activist ."Going Far From Home to Feel at Home", The New York Times, July 17, 2007.
Revised: File:February 2015 PACHA-241 (16353105328).jpg|300px|Harlan Pruden at the February 2015 PACHA]] Harlan Pruden is a First Nations Cree scholar and community organizer ."Going Far From Home to Feel at Home", The New York Times, July 17, 2007.
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Original:  As the co-founder of NE2SS, he devoted much time and energy to revitalizing traditional cultural values, culture and ceremonies for Two-Spirit urban Native peoples that call NYC and the Tri-State area home.
Revised:  As the Co-Founder of NE2SS, he devoted much time and energy to revitalizing traditional cultural values, culture and ceremonies for Two-Spirit urban Native peoples that call NYC and the Tri-State area home.
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Original:  He was also a co-chair of the National Native HIV/AIDS Coalition, one of the first national efforts within the HIV/AIDS field to include all of the Two-Spirit organizations and groups in the United States.
Revised:  He was also a Co-Chair of the National Native HIV/AIDS Coalition, one of the first national efforts within the HIV/AIDS field to include all of the Two-Spirit organizations and groups in the United States.
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Original:  In 2011, Pruden was instrumental in helping the Chicago-Based Legacy Project, whose outdoor LGBT history installation, The Legacy Walk, will include a bronze plaque co-written by Pruden to commemorate the lives, gifts, and sacrifices of two-spirit people in their struggle for acknowledgment and respect within the larger LGBT community.
Revised:  In 2011, Pruden was instrumental in helping the Chicago-Based Legacy Project, whose outdoor LGBT history installation, The Legacy Walk, will include a bronze plaque co-written by Pruden to commemorate the lives, gifts, and sacrifices of Two-Spirit people in their struggle for acknowledgment and respect within the larger LGBT community.
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Original:  In April 2011, Pruden was appointed to Manhattan Community Board 12, where he served as the chair of parks and cultural affairs .
Revised:  In April 2011, Pruden was appointed to Manhattan Community Board 12, where he served as the Chair of Parks and Cultural Affairs .
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Original:  The Addis Ababa Agreement was observed by Emperor Hail Selassie of Ethiopia and led to the establishment of a regional autonomy for South Sudan.
Revised:  The Addis Ababa Agreement was observed by Emperor Haile Selassie of Ethiopia and led to the establishment of a regional autonomy for South Sudan.
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Original: Colonial Legacy Until 1956, the British government, in collaboration with the Egyptian government (under a condominium governing arrangement) administered Southern Sudan and Northern Sudan as separate regions under international sovereignty.
Revised: Colonial era Until 1956, the British government, in collaboration with the Egyptian government (under a condominium governing arrangement) administered Southern Sudan and Northern Sudan as separate regions under international sovereignty.
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Original: Colonial Legacy Until 1956, the British government, in collaboration with the Egyptian government (under a condominium governing arrangement) administered Southern Sudan and Northern Sudan as separate regions under international sovereignty.
Revised: Colonial Legacy Until 1956, the British government, in cooperation with the Egyptian government (under a condominium governing arrangement) administered Southern Sudan and Northern Sudan as separate regions under international sovereignty.
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Original:  This act was taken without consultation with minority southern leaders, who feared being subsumed by the political power of the larger north under the British colonial rule .
Revised:  This act was taken without consultation with minority southern leaders, who feared being subsumed by the political power of the Northern elites in the colonial political structure .
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