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Original:  The Jatalla search engine appears unique in that , unlike market leader Google and others, Jatalla search relevance rankings are produced only by users themselves, rather than through the use of webcrawlers and page analysis algorithms.
Revised:  The new search engine appears unique in that , unlike market leader Google and others, Jatalla search relevance rankings are produced only by users themselves, rather than through the use of webcrawlers and page analysis algorithms.
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Original:  The Jatalla search engine appears unique in that , unlike market leader Google and others, Jatalla search relevance rankings are produced only by users themselves, rather than through the use of webcrawlers and page analysis algorithms.
Revised:  The Jatalla search engine appears unique in that relevance rankings are produced only by users themselves, rather than through the use of webcrawlers and page analysis algorithms.
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Original:  In this way, Jatalla resembles Wikipedia, Digg, and del.icio.us as part of a growing trend of user-controlled content .
Revised:  In this way, Jatalla resembles Wikipedia, Digg, and del.icio.us as part of a growing trend of user-controlled content 
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Original:  At the bottom of each search results page Jatalla displays the following message:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Unsatisfied?
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Unsatisfied?
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Original:  " This approach , where every user helps shape search results, makes the Jatalla search engine a collaborative project, whereas conventional search engine results are typically produced by a formula that is determined internally .
Revised:  " , collective processing, and transparency. This approach may be contrasted with that of search engines in which rankings are produced by a formula that is determined internally .
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Original:  For instance, a recent court rulingNews.com article detailing the background of the case held that Google's page rankings are Google's "opinion" and are computer-generated, and that therefore a mysterious change in rankings need not be justified.
Revised:  For instance, a recent court held that Google's page rankings are Google's "opinion" and are computer-generated, and that therefore a mysterious change in rankings need not be justified.
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Original:  For instance, a recent court rulingNews.com article detailing the background of the case held that Google's page rankings are Google's "opinion" and are computer-generated, and that therefore a mysterious change in rankings need not be justified.
Revised:  For instance, a recent court rulingNews.com article detailing the background of the case 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Note
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ruling
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Original:  After its previously expected July roll-out date was delayed, Jatalla.com has made available a prototype of its search engine.
Revised: A screen shot of the search engine After its previously expected July roll-out date was delayed, Jatalla.com has made available a prototype of its search engine.
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Original:  This approach may be contrasted with that of search engines in which rankings are produced by a formula that is determined internally, as indicated in a recent court ruling  
Revised:  This approach may be contrasted with that of search engines in which rankings are produced by a formula that is determined internally, as indicated in a recent court ruling . 
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Original: After its previously expected July roll-out date was delayed, Jatalla .com has made available a prototype of its search engine.
Revised: After its previously expected July roll-out date was delayed, Jatalla , has made available a prototype of its search engine.
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Original:  It is super high speed Internet that is capable of transmitting data with speeds of up to ten gigabytes per second, 10,000 times faster than the current spread of broadband, and 20,000 times faster than dial-up.
Revised:  It is super high speed Internet that is capable of transmitting data with speeds of up to ten gigabits per second, 10,000 times faster than the current spread of broadband, and 20,000 times faster than dial-up.
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Original:  It is super high speed Internet that is capable of transmitting data with speeds of up to ten gigabits per second, 10,000 times faster than the current spread of broadband, and 200,000 times faster than dial-up.
Revised:  It is super high speed Internet that is capable of transmitting data with speeds of up to ten gigabits per second, 10,000 times faster than the current speead of broadband, and 200,000 times faster than dial-up.
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Original:  It is super high speed Internet that is capable of transmitting data with speeds of up to ten gigabits per second, 10,000 times faster than the current speead of broadband, and 200,000 times faster than dial-up.
Revised:  It is super high speed Internet that is capable of transmitting data with speeds of up to ten gigabits per second, 10,000 times faster than the current speed of broadband, and 200,000 times faster than dial-up.
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Original: Ernesto, now a tropical storm, has made landfall along the Carolina's coastline in the state of North Carolina near Long Beach in Brunswick County .
Revised: Ernesto, now a tropical storm, made landfall along the Carolina's coastline in the state of North Carolina near Long Beach in Brunswick County .
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Original: Ernesto, now a tropical storm, has made landfall along the Carolina's coastline in the state of North Carolina near Long Beach in Brunswick County .
Revised: Ernesto, now a tropical storm, has made landfall along the coastline of the state of North Carolina near Long Beach in Brunswick County .
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Original:  With Ernesto, a threat of flooding is the main concern with meteorologists.
Revised:  The threat of flooding is the main concern with meteorologists.
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Original:  Hurricane watches have been activated in South Carolina from South Santee River  to Cape Lookout , located in North Carolina, but all watches located south of Santee River are no longer in effect.
Revised:  Hurricane watches have been activated in from South Santee River to Cape Lookout , located in North Carolina, but all watches located south of Santee River are no longer in effect.
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Original:  Hurricane watches have been activated in South Carolina from South Santee River  to Cape Lookout , located in North Carolina, but all watches located south of Santee River are no longer in effect.
Revised:  Hurricane watches have been activated in South Carolina from South Santee River in South Carolina to Cape Lookout , located in North Carolina, but all watches located south of Santee River are no longer in effect.
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Original:  Hurricane watches have been activated in South Carolina from South Santee River  to Cape Lookout , located in North Carolina, but all watches located south of Santee River are no longer in effect.
Revised:  Hurricane watches have been activated in South Carolina from South Santee River to Cape Lookout in North Carolina, but all watches located south of Santee River are no longer in effect.
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Original:  He was leaving a incoming flight from Bangkok.
Revised:  He was leaving an incoming flight from Bangkok.
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Original:  Police think the four bodies had been lain there for up to four weeks.
Revised:  Police think the four bodies had been there for up to four weeks.
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Original:  Three days after the bodies were discovered, a thirty-five year-old woman and a forty year-old man were arrested in connection with the deaths, but they were later released on police bail . Police say they were aware that Mr Rahan had left the country on a Thailand-bound flight about four weeks ago.
Revised:  Three days after the bodies were discovered, a thirty-five year-old woman and a forty year-old man were arrested in connection with the deaths, but they were later released on police bail Police say they were aware that Mr Rahan had left the country on a Thailand-bound flight about four weeks ago.
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Original:  He was leaving an incoming flight from Bangkok  .
Revised:  He was leaving an incoming flight from Bangkok , Thailand .
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Original:  He is expected be taken to Manchester  for questioning later today.
Revised:  He is expected be taken to Manchester , England for questioning later today.
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Original:  Police say they were aware that Mr  Rahan had left the country on a Thailand-bound flight about four weeks ago.
Revised:  Police say they were aware that Mr . Rahan had left the country on a Thailand-bound flight about four weeks ago.
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Original:  After the bodies were discovered, officers wanted to trace the whereabouts of Mr  Rahan immediately.
Revised:  After the bodies were discovered, officers wanted to trace the whereabouts of Mr . Rahan immediately.
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Original:  Mrs  Rahan, eleven year-old Adam, eight year-old Abbas and six year-old Henne were found to have serious head injuries, and post-mortem tests concluded that they died from being beaten to death.
Revised:  Mrs . Rahan, eleven year-old Adam, eight year-old Abbas and six year-old Henne were found to have serious head injuries, and post-mortem tests concluded that they died from being beaten to death.
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Original:  He is expected  be taken to Manchester, England for questioning later today.
Revised:  He is expected to be taken to Manchester, England for questioning later today.
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Original:  The corpses of thirty-two year-old Uzma Rahan and her three children were found in their home in Cheadle Hulme in Greater Manchester on August 20.
Revised:  The bodies of thirty-two year-old Uzma Rahan and her three children were found in their home in Cheadle Hulme in Greater Manchester on August 20.
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Original:  Police think the four bodies had been there for up to four weeks. Relate
Revised:  Police think the four bodies had been there for up to four weeks. Related new
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Original: The Greek team had a very good day - especially Vassilis Spanoulis and Dimitris Diamantidis - while the zone defence organized by the Greek coach Panayiotis Giannakis blocked the NBA stars who  despite their good performance, will not take part in the final.
Revised: The Greek team had a very good day - especially Vassilis Spanoulis and Dimitris Diamantidis - while the zone defence organized by the Greek coach Panayiotis Giannakis blocked the NBA stars who , despite their good performance, will not take part in the final.
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Original:  United States: Paul 3, Wade 22(1), Arinas , Heinrich 12(4), Bowen, Anthony 25(3), Jameson, Battier 1, James 15, Johnson 3(1), Bosh 2, Miller, Howard 10
Revised:  United States: Paul 3, Wade 22(1), Arenas , Heinrich 12(4), Bowen, Anthony 25(3), Jameson, Battier 1, James 15, Johnson 3(1), Bosh 2, Miller, Howard 10
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Original: Results of gene therapy trials to fight cancer were released today by the US National Cancer Institute, Bethesda, show some levels of success.
Revised: Results of gene therapy trials to fight cancer released today by the US National Cancer Institute, Bethesda, show some levels of success.
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Original:  Cells were removed from each patient and modified in the laboratory, once they new T cells were ready patients underwent chemotherapy to kill most of their current immune system.
Revised:  Cells were removed from each patient and modified in the laboratory, once the new T cells were ready patients underwent chemotherapy to kill most of their current immune system.
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Original:  Doctors confirmed he was free of the disease last week,  2 years after treatment began.
Revised:  Doctors confirmed he was free of the disease last week, nearly 2 years after treatment began.
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Original:  Of the 17 subects only 2 were cured of the diesease (an aggressive form of skin cancer called a melanoma which is usually fatal).
Revised:  Of the 17 subects only 2 were cured of the disease (an aggressive form of skin cancer called a melanoma which is usually fatal).
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Original:   Cells were removed from each patient and modified in the laboratory , once the new T cells were ready patients underwent chemotherapy to kill most of their current immune system .
Revised:  T Cells were removed from each patient and modified in the laboratory , once the new T cells were ready patients underwent chemotherapy to kill most of their current immune system .
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Original:   Cells were removed from each patient and modified in the laboratory , once the new T cells were ready patients underwent chemotherapy to kill most of their current immune system .
Revised:  Cells were removed from each patient and modified in the laboratory . Patients underwent chemotherapy to kill most of their current immune system .
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Original:  Rosenberg now hopoes to run a new trial with possibly stronger gene therapy treatments, he is currently awaiting FDA approval
Revised:  Rosenberg now hopes to run a new trial with possibly stronger gene therapy treatments, he is currently awaiting FDA approval
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Original:  The technique uses genetically modified White Blood cells (or T Cells ) to attack and kill cancer cells.
Revised:  The technique uses genetically modified white blood cells (or T Cells ) to attack and kill cancer cells.
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Original:  The technique uses genetically modified White Blood cells (or T Cells ) to attack and kill cancer cells.
Revised:  The technique uses genetically modified White Blood cells (or T cells ) to attack and kill cancer cells.
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Original:  Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells (with a virus) tocontain a new receptor (Receptors are what enable the cell to identify viruses and diseases).
Revised:  Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells (with a virus) to contain a new receptor (Receptors are what enable the cell to identify viruses and diseases).
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Original: Results of gene therapy trials to fight cancer released today by the US National Cancer Institute, Bethesda , show some levels of success.
Revised: Results of gene therapy trials at the US National Cancer Institute, Bethesda , show some levels of success.
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Original:  The team treated 17 terminal  cancer patients with modified cells from their imune systems.
Revised:  The team treated 17 terminal cancer patients with modified cells from their immune systems.
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Original:  The technique uses genetically modified white blood cells ( or T cells) to attack and kill  cancer cells.
Revised:  The technique uses genetically modified white blood cells ( more specifically T cells) to attack and kill cancer cells.
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Original:  The technique uses genetically modified white blood cells ( or T cells) to attack and kill  cancer cells.
Revised:  The technique uses genetically modified white blood cells ( or T cells) to attack and kill the cancer cells.
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Original:  Of the 17 subects only 2 were cured of the disease (an aggressive form of skin cancer called a melanoma which is usually fatal  ).
Revised:  Of the 17 subjects only 2 were cured of the disease (an aggressive form of skin cancer called a melanoma which is usually fatal ).
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Original:  The remianing 15 patients were not affected by the treatment.
Revised:  The remaining 15 patients were not affected by the treatment.
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Original:  T cells normally attack and kill diseases in the body, however cancer is not recognisedand so the immune system cannot affect it . Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells (with a virus) to contain a new receptor  (Receptors are what enable the  cell to identify viruses and diseases).
Revised:  T cells normally attack and kill diseases in the body, however cancer is not recognisedand so the immune system cannot affect them . Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells (with a virus) to contain a new receptor (Receptors are what enable the cell to identify viruses and diseases).
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Original:  T cells normally attack and kill diseases in the body, however cancer is not recognisedand so the immune system cannot affect it . Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells (with a virus) to contain a new receptor  (Receptors are what enable the  cell to identify viruses and diseases).
Revised:  T cells normally attack and kill diseases in the body, however cancer is not recognisedand so the immune system cannot affect it . Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells to contain a new receptor (Receptors are what enable the cell to identify viruses and diseases).
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  T cells normally attack and kill diseases in the body, however cancer is not recognisedand so the immune system cannot affect it . Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells (with a virus) to contain a new receptor  (Receptors are what enable the  cell to identify viruses and diseases).
Revised:  T cells normally attack and kill diseases in the body, however cancer is not recognisedand so the immune system cannot affect it . Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells (with a virus) to contain a new receptor . (Receptors are what enable the cell to identify viruses and diseases).
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Original:  T cells normally attack and kill diseases in the body, however cancer is not recognisedand so the immune system cannot affect it . Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells (with a virus) to contain a new receptor  (Receptors are what enable the  cell to identify viruses and diseases).
Revised:  T cells normally attack and kill diseases in the body, however cancer is not recognisedand so the immune system cannot affect it . Gene therapy involves modifying some of a patients T cells (with a virus) to contain a new receptor (Receptors are what enable the immune cell to identify viruses and diseases).
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Original:   T Cells were removed from each patient and modified in the laboratory.
Revised:  In the trial, T Cells were removed from each patient and modified in the laboratory.
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Original:  When injected the modified cells successfully survived in the body - making up 10\% of the subjects T cell count during the first 2 months.
Revised:  The modified cells successfully survived in the body - making up 10\% of the subjects T cell count during the first 2 months.
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Original:  When injected the modified cells successfully survived in the body - making up 10\% of the subjects T cell count during the first 2 months.
Revised:  When injected the modified cells successfully survived after injection into the body - making up 10\% of the subjects T cell count during the first 2 months.
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Original:  When injected the modified cells successfully survived in the body - making up 10\% of the subjects T cell count during the first 2 months.
Revised:  When injected the modified cells successfully survived in the body - making up 10\% of the subject's T cell count during the first 2 months.
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Original:  Rosenberg now hopes to run a new trial with possibly stronger gene therapy treatments, he is currently awaiting FDA approval  
Revised:  Rosenberg now hopes to run a new trial with possibly stronger gene therapy treatments, he is currently awaiting FDA approval . 
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Original:  This news partially reduces the usefulness of the leak to hyper-partisan critics of the administration, who were trying to establish the leak as an administration-wide conspiracy to maliciously harm its critics.
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Original:  As CNN notes,  " The revelation that Armitage was the source of Novak's column is somewhat anticlimactic for Bush administration critics who had used the story as a weapon in Washington's partisan battles."
Revised:  As CNN notes, " ... is somewhat anticlimactic for Bush administration critics who had used the story as a weapon in Washington's partisan battles."
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Original:  It appears Armitage discussed it casually without knowledge of whether her status was covert, and without any malicious intent, as "inside Washington" gossip.
Revised:  According to sources, Armitage discussed it casually without knowledge of whether her status was covert, and without any malicious intent, as "inside Washington" gossip.
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Original:  Plame 's husband Joseph Wilson , however, continues to claim that the administration intentionally used the leak to retaliate against him for his criticism of the war on Iraq.
Revised:  Plame and her husband Joseph Wilson , however, continues to claim that the administration intentionally used the leak to retaliate against him for his criticism of the war on Iraq.
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Original: Mario Lopez . Close on his heels is actress Vivica Fox, with four-to-one odds.
Revised: Mario Lopez is favored to win the third season of American television series Dancing with the Stars, with 3:1 odds of winning, but close on his heels is actress Vivica Fox, with four-to-one odds.
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Original:  Other close contenders are Monique Coleman of High School Musical  , Joey Lawrence from Blossom , and Harry Hamlin  , each with six-to-one odds.
Revised:  Monique Coleman of High School Musical , Joey Lawrence from Blossom , and Harry Hamlin , each with six-to-one odds.
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Original:  Other close contenders are Monique Coleman of High School Musical  , Joey Lawrence from Blossom , and Harry Hamlin  , each with six-to-one odds.
Revised:  Other close contenders are Monique Coleman ( High School Musical , Joey Lawrence from Blossom , and Harry Hamlin , each with six-to-one odds.
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Original:  Other close contenders are Monique Coleman of High School Musical  , Joey Lawrence from Blossom , and Harry Hamlin  , each with six-to-one odds.
Revised:  Other close contenders are Monique Coleman of High School Musical ) , Joey Lawrence from Blossom , and Harry Hamlin , each with six-to-one odds.
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Original:  Other close contenders are Monique Coleman of High School Musical  , Joey Lawrence from Blossom , and Harry Hamlin  , each with six-to-one odds.
Revised:  Other close contenders are Monique Coleman of High School Musical , Joey Lawrence (Blossom) , and Harry Hamlin , each with six-to-one odds.
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Original:   Willa Ford and Sara Evans each rank 8:1.  7:2 - Mario Lopez 4:1 - Vivica Fox 6:1 - Monique Coleman 6:1 - Joey Lawrence 6:1 - Harry Hamlin 8:1 - Willa Ford 8:1 - Sara Evans 15:1 - Shanna Moakler 15:1 - Tucker Carlson 15:1 - Emmit Smith 30:1 - Jerry Springer External links BetBet: Dancing with the Sta
Revised:  Singers Willa Ford and Sara Evans each rank 8:1. 7:2 - Mario Lopez 4:1 - Vivica Fox 6:1 - Monique Coleman 6:1 - Joey Lawrence 6:1 - Harry Hamlin 8:1 - Willa Ford 8:1 - Sara Evans 15:1 - Shanna Moakler 15:1 - Tucker Carlson 15:1 - Emmit Smith 30:1 - Jerry Springer External links BetBet: Dancing with the Sta
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Original:   Willa Ford and Sara Evans each rank 8:1.  7:2 - Mario Lopez 4:1 - Vivica Fox 6:1 - Monique Coleman 6:1 - Joey Lawrence 6:1 - Harry Hamlin 8:1 - Willa Ford 8:1 - Sara Evans 15:1 - Shanna Moakler 15:1 - Tucker Carlson 15:1 - Emmit Smith 30:1 - Jerry Springer External links BetBet: Dancing with the Sta
Revised:  Willa Ford and Sara Evans each rank 8:1. 7:2 - Mario Lopez 4:1 - Vivica Fox 6:1 - Monique Coleman 6:1 - Joey Lawrence 6:1 - Harry Hamlin 8:1 - Willa Ford 8:1 - Sara Evans 15:1 - Shanna Moakler 15:1 - Tucker Carlson 15:1 - Emmit Smith 30:1 - Jerry External links BetBet: Dancing with the Sta
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