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Original:  During the Algerian War of Independence (1954–62), he held political missions such as a post in the provisional exile government of the FLN, the Gouvernement Provisoire de la République Algérienne , (GPRA) between 1958 and 1960.
Revised:  During the Algerian War of Independence (1954–62), he held political missions such as a post in the provisional government in exile of the FLN, the Gouvernement Provisoire de la République Algérienne , (GPRA) between 1958 and 1960.
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Original:  During the Algerian War of Independence (1954–62), he held political missions such as a post in the provisional exile government of the FLN, the Gouvernement Provisoire de la République Algérienne , (GPRA) between 1958 and 1960.
Revised:  During the Algerian War of Independence (1954–62), he held political missions such as a post in the provisional exile government of the FLN, the Gouvernement provisoire de la République Algérienne , (GPRA) between 1958 and 1960.
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Original:  During the Algerian War of Independence (1954–62), he held political missions such as a post in the provisional exile government of the FLN, the Gouvernement Provisoire de la République Algérienne , (GPRA) between 1958 and 1960.
Revised:  During the Algerian War of Independence (1954–62), he held political missions such as a post in the provisional exile government of the FLN, the Gouvernement Provisoire de la République algérienne , (GPRA) between 1958 and 1960.
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Original:  Following the Sétif massacre, he was among those who pushed for the formation of an armed clandestine network, the Organisation Spéciale (OS).
Revised:  Following the Sétif massacre, he was among those who pushed for the formation of an armed clandestine network, the Organisation spéciale (OS).
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Original:  are fragments of continents that have broken off from main continental masses to form distinct islands , often several hundred kilometers from their place of origin.
Revised:  are fragments of continents that have broken off from main continental masses to form distinct islands and often several hundred kilometers from their place of origin.
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Original:  these include Madagascar, the northern Mascarene Plateau, which includes the Seychelles microcontinent , the island of Timor , etc.
Revised:  some examples include Madagascar; the northern Mascarene Plateau, which includes the Seychelles microcontinent , the island of Timor , etc.
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Original:  these include Madagascar, the northern Mascarene Plateau, which includes the Seychelles microcontinent , the island of Timor , etc.
Revised:  these include Madagascar, the northern Mascarene Plateau, which includes the Seychelles microcontinent ; and the island of Timor , etc.
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Original:  these include Madagascar, the northern Mascarene Plateau, which includes the Seychelles microcontinent , the island of Timor , etc.
Revised:  these include Madagascar, the northern Mascarene Plateau, which includes the Seychelles microcontinent , the island of Timor . etc.
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Original:  and the island of Timor. etc.
Revised:  and the island of Timor. 
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Original:  are fragments of continents that have broken off from main continental masses to form distinct islands and often several hundred kilometers from their place of origin.
Revised:  are pieces of continents that have broken off from main continental masses to form distinct islands and often several hundred kilometers from their place of origin.
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Original:     Some microcontinents are fragments of Gondwana or other ancient cratonic continents;
Revised:  History Some microcontinents are fragments of Gondwana or other ancient cratonic continents;
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Original:  Making a car heavier, for instance, increases the load that the engine must pull , likewise making it more aerodynamic decreases drag ( which acts as a load on the car as well ) . Torque can be thought of as the ability to move load, and the revs are how much work it can do with that load in a given amount of time.
Revised:  Making a car heavier, for instance, increases the load that the engine must pull . Likewise, making it more aerodynamic decreases drag ( which acts as a load on the car as well ) . Torque can be thought of as the ability to move load, and the revs are how much work it can do with that load in a given amount of time.
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Original:  Making a car heavier, for instance, increases the load that the engine must pull , likewise making it more aerodynamic decreases drag ( which acts as a load on the car as well ) . Torque can be thought of as the ability to move load, and the revs are how much work it can do with that load in a given amount of time.
Revised:  Making a car heavier, for instance, increases the load that the engine must pull , likewise making it more aerodynamic decreases drag , which acts as a load on the car as well ) . Torque can be thought of as the ability to move load, and the revs are how much work it can do with that load in a given amount of time.
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Original:  Making a car heavier, for instance, increases the load that the engine must pull , likewise making it more aerodynamic decreases drag ( which acts as a load on the car as well ) . Torque can be thought of as the ability to move load, and the revs are how much work it can do with that load in a given amount of time.
Revised:  Making a car heavier, for instance, increases the load that the engine must pull , likewise making it more aerodynamic decreases drag ( which acts as a load on the car as well . Torque can be thought of as the ability to move load, and the revs are how much work it can do with that load in a given amount of time.
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Original:  Therefore  torque and revs together create kilowatts, or total power output , which can be related to the "workload" of the engine/car, or how much work it can do with a given amount of load.
Revised:  Therefore , torque and revs together create kilowatts, or total power output , which can be related to the "workload" of the engine/car, or how much work it can do with a given amount of load.
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Original:  Therefore  torque and revs together create kilowatts, or total power output , which can be related to the "workload" of the engine/car, or how much work it can do with a given amount of load.
Revised:  Therefore torque and revs together create kilowatts, or total power output . Total output can be related to the "workload" of the engine/car, or how much work it can do with a given amount of load.
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Original: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes It is well accepted that there is a relationship between the  media by which information is transferred and presented to a decision maker and their cognitive workload.
Revised: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes There is a relationship between the media by which information is transferred and presented to a decision maker and their cognitive workload.
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Original: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes It is well accepted that there is a relationship between the  media by which information is transferred and presented to a decision maker and their cognitive workload.
Revised: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes It is well accepted that there is a relationship between the media by which information is presented to a decision maker and their cognitive workload.
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Original: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes It is well accepted that there is a relationship between the  media by which information is transferred and presented to a decision maker and their cognitive workload.
Revised: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes It is well accepted that there is a relationship between the media by which information is transferred and presented to a decision maker and its cognitive workload.
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Original: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes There is a relationship between the sort and complexity of media by which information is  presented to a decision maker and its cognitive workload.
Revised: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes It is well accepted that there is a relationship between the sort and complexity of media by which information is presented to a decision maker and its cognitive workload.
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Original: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes There is a relationship between the sort and complexity of media by which information is  presented to a decision maker and its cognitive workload.
Revised: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes There is a relationship between the media by which information is presented to a decision maker and its cognitive workload.
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Original: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes There is a relationship between the sort and complexity of media by which information is  presented to a decision maker and its cognitive workload.
Revised: Cognitive workload in time critical decision-making processes There is a relationship between the sort and complexity of media by which information is presented to a decision maker and their cognitive workload.
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Original:  However, it is clear that cognitive workload results from mental processes when performing tasks, depending on the users's capabilities and the task demands.
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Original:  One particular application of this is weight lifting/weights training, where both anecotal evidence and scientific research has shown that it is the total "workload" that is important to muscle growth, as opposed to just the load, just the volume, or "time under tension".
Revised:  One particular application of this is weight lifting/weights training, where both anecdotal evidence and scientific research has shown that it is the total "workload" that is important to muscle growth, as opposed to just the load, just the volume, or "time under tension".
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Original:  Work loads can vary in many different situations, but the average workload is average.
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Original: Other psychotherapies have also emphasised the importance of the nonverbal component of the patient's communication,Eric Berne, What Do You Say After You Say Hello? (1974) p. 314-7 sometimes privileging this over the verbal content.
Revised: Other psychotherapies have also emphasised the importance of the non-verbal component of the patient's communication,Eric Berne, What Do You Say After You Say Hello? (1974) p. 314-7 sometimes privileging this over the verbal content.
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Original:  Wardhaugh, An Introduction to Sociolinguistics (2011) p. 310 - that we expect our auditors regularly to fill in the social context/norms of our conversations as we proceed.
Revised:  Wardhaugh, An Introduction to Sociolinguistics (2011) p. 310 — that we expect our auditors regularly to fill in the social context/norms of our conversations as we proceed.
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Original:  Todd ed., Learning Desire (2013) p. 249 - something which may shed light on the unconscious phantasies of the analysand.
Revised:  Todd ed., Learning Desire (2013) p. 249 — something which may shed light on the unconscious phantasies of the analysand.
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Original:  URL Her album Generation Hawaii won four Na Hoku Hanohano Awards in 2007.
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Original:  Her album Generation Hawaii won four Na Hoku Hanohano Awards in 2007: Album of the year , Hawaiian Album of the Year, Female Vocalist of the Year, and Best Engineered Album.
Revised:  Her album Generation Hawaii won four Na Hoku Hanohano Awards in 2007: Album of the Year , Hawaiian Album of the Year, Female Vocalist of the Year, and Best Engineered Album.
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Original: Amy Hanaialii Gilliom at the Hawaii Bowl Amy Hānaialiʻi Gilliom is an American vocalist and songwriter.
Revised: Amy Hānaialiʻi Gilliom is an American vocalist and songwriter.
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Original: Amy Hanaialiʻi is a six time Grammy Award URL She is best known for reinvigorating the Hawaiian tradition of female falsetto singing.
Revised:  Hanaialiʻi is a six time Grammy Award URL She is best known for reinvigorating the Hawaiian tradition of female falsetto singing.
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Original:  In 2014 Amy Hanaialiʻi launched her own line of Wine & Champagne with distribution throughout the USA.
Revised:  In 2014 Hanaialiʻi launched her own line of Wine & Champagne with distribution throughout the USA.
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Original:  In 2014 Amy Hanaialiʻi Gilliom starred as Eva Perón in the musical Evita on Maui.
Revised:  In 2014 Hanaialiʻi Gilliom starred as Eva Perón in the musical Evita on Maui.
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Original:  Amy 's grandmother performed at the Hawaiian Room for many years.
Revised:  Hanaialiʻi 's grandmother performed at the Hawaiian Room for many years.
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Original:  For example , a person who is experiencing some form of illness would focus the prayer on the desired state of perfect health and affirm this desired intention "as if already happened" rather than identifying the illness and then asking God for help to eliminate it.
Revised:  For instance , a person who is experiencing some form of illness would focus the prayer on the desired state of perfect health and affirm this desired intention "as if already happened" rather than identifying the illness and then asking God for help to eliminate it.
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Original:  is that affirmative prayer addresses the practitioner to God, the Divine, the Creative Mind, emphasizing the seemingly practical aspects of religious belief . Some members of the self-help and self-improvement movements advocate affirmative prayer in addition to or instead of secular affirmations.
Revised:  is that affirmative prayer addresses the practitioner to God, the Divine, the Creative Mind, emphasizing the seemingly practical aspects of religious belief Some members of the self-help and self-improvement movements advocate affirmative prayer in addition to or instead of secular affirmations.
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Original: Affirmative prayer is a form of prayer or a metaphysical technique that is focused on a positive outcome rather than a negative situation.
Revised: Affirmative prayer is a form of prayer that is focused on a positive outcome rather than a negative situation.
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Original:  For instance, a person who is experiencing some form of illness would focus the prayer on the desired state of perfect health and affirm this desired intention "as if already happened" rather than identifying the illness and then asking God for help to eliminate it .
Revised:  For instance, a person who is experiencing some form of illness would focus the prayer on the desired state of perfect health and affirm this desired intention "as if already happened" .
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Original: What sets affirmative prayer apart from secular affirmations of the autosuggestion type taught by the 19th century self-help author Émile Coué (whose most famous affirmation was "Every day in every way, I am getting better and better") is that affirmative prayer addresses the practitioner to God, the Divine, the Creative Mind, emphasizing the seemingly practical aspects of religious belief . Affirmative prayer help in overcoming daily stress and make the day better and happy.
Revised: What sets affirmative prayer apart from secular affirmations of the autosuggestion type taught by the 19th century self-help author Émile Coué (whose most famous affirmation was "Every day in every way, I am getting better and better") is that affirmative prayer addresses the practitioner to God, the Divine, the Creative Mind, emphasizing the seemingly practical aspects of religious belief Affirmative prayer help in overcoming daily stress and make the day better and happy.
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Original:  As Angkor collapsed under the advancing jungles, the center of power of the Theravada Cambodia moved south toward present day Phnom Penh.
Revised:  As Angkor collapsed under the advancing jungles, the centre of power of the Theravada Cambodia moved south toward present day Phnom Penh.
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Original:  After 1431 when the Cambodian kings permanently abandoned Angkor due to a Siamese invasion, the royal court was located on Udon Mountain, a few miles north of Phnom Penh.
Revised:  After 1431 when the Cambodian kings permanently abandoned Angkor due to a Siamese invasion, the royal court was located on Udon Mountain, a few kilometres north of Phnom Penh.
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Original:  However, the term "usurper" is not appropriate when speaking in the Khmer context of royal succession as the Khmer throne did not exclusively include paternal lines but also recognized and even valued more to an extend the royal maternal line.[10]
Revised:  However, the term "usurper" is not appropriate when speaking in the Khmer context of royal succession as the Khmer throne did not exclusively include paternal lines but also recognized and even valued more to an extent the royal maternal line.[10]
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Original: Suvannaphum King Ashoka sent missionaries to the land of Suwannaphum, which has sometimes been identified as the mainland southeast Asian region of Mon (now a stat in Myanma, the stat of Mon) and Khmer (now Cambodia) people.
Revised: Suvannaphum King Ashoka sent missionaries to the land of Suwannaphum, which has sometimes been identified as the mainland southeast Asian region of Mon (now a state in Myanmar, the state of Mon) and Khmer (now Cambodia) people.
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Original:  Various Buddhist sects and schools, including Tantrism, vied or coexisted with a dominant Brahamanism and indigenous animistic faiths for centuries before the rise of the classical Southeast Asian empires beginning in the 9th century A.D.
Revised:  Various Buddhist sects and schools, including Tantrism, vied or coexisted with a dominant Brahmanism and indigenous animistic faiths for centuries before the rise of the classical Southeast Asian empires beginning in the 9th century A.D.
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Original: Suvannaphum King AshokaAshoka sent missionaries to the land of Suwannaphum, which has sometimes been identified as the mainland southeast Asian region of Mon (now a state in Myanmar, the state of Mon) and Khmer (now Cambodia) people.
Revised: Suvannaphum King Ashoka sent missionaries to the land of Suwannaphum, which has sometimes been identified as the mainland southeast Asian region of Mon (now a state in Myanmar, the state of Mon) and Khmer (now Cambodia) people.
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Original:  That is, even a maximum score of 30 points can never rule out dementia  .
Revised:  Even a maximum score of 30 points can never rule out dementia .
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Original:  Low to very low scores  correlate closely with the presence of dementia, although other mental disorders can also lead to abnormal findings on MMSE testing.
Revised:  Low to very low scores may correlate closely with the presence of dementia, although other mental disorders can also lead to abnormal findings on MMSE testing.
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Original:  He left office in 1842, a bit after the abdication of King William.
Revised:  He left office in 1842, following the abdication of King William.
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Original:  Along with de Nagell, he was a signatory of the Treaty of the Hague (1818), by which the British and Dutch established the Anglo-Dutch Mixed Commission Courts.
Revised:  Along with de Nagell, he was a signatory of the Treaty of The Hague (1818), by which the British and Dutch established the Anglo-Dutch Mixed Commission Courts.
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Original:  This saw him win the South African Cricket Annual Cricketer of the Year award in 1977.
Revised:  This led to his selection as one of the winners of the South African Cricket Annual Cricketer of the Year award in 1977.
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Original:  Unlike International Women's Day, (March 8) International Men’s Day is not officially recognized by the United Nations, which observes World Toilet Day on November 19.
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Original:  The objectives of celebrating an International Men's Day are set out in 'All The Six Pillars of International Men's Day'.
Revised:  The objectives of celebrating an International Men's Day are weakly cobbled together in 'All The Six Pillars of International Men's Day'.
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Original: "Thompson, J.%DIFDELCMD < [%%% article 'Origins and Evolution: Perspectives of Two International Days' In Search Of Fatherhood Journal, 2010 Trinidad and Tobago Citizens in Trinidad and Tobago were the first to observe IMD on 19 November 1999.
Revised: "Thompson, J.%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'Origins and Evolution: Perspectives of Two International Days' In Search Of Fatherhood Journal, 2010 Trinidad and Tobago Citizens in Trinidad and Tobago were the first to observe IMD on 19 November 1999.
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Original: "Thompson, J.%DIFDELCMD < [%%% article 'Origins and Evolution: Perspectives of Two International Days' In Search Of Fatherhood Journal, 2010 Trinidad and Tobago Citizens in Trinidad and Tobago were the first to observe IMD on 19 November 1999.
Revised: "Thompson, J.%DIFDELCMD < [%%% article Trinidad and Tobago Citizens in Trinidad and Tobago were the first to observe IMD on 19 November 1999.
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Original:  2020, "Better Health for Men and Boys" 2021, "Better relations between men and women" International Men's Health Week International Non-Binary People's Day Tango no Sekku, formerly celebrated as Boys' Day in Japan International Women's Day, March 8th References External links International Men's Day – Holidays Portal
Revised:  2020, "Better Health for Men and Boys" 2021, "Better relations between men and women" References External links International Men's Day – Holidays Portal
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Original: International Men's Day (IMD) is a global holiday celebrated annually on November 19 to recognize and celebrate the cultural, political, and socioeconomic achievements of men.
Revised: International Men's Day (IMD) is a global holiday celebrated annually on November 19 to recognise and celebrate the cultural, political, and socioeconomic achievements of men.
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Original:  Unlike International Women's Day , (March 8)
Revised:  Unlike International Women's Day (March 8)
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Original:   International Men’s Day is not officially recognized by the United Nations, which observes World Toilet Day on November URL Early background Calls for an International Men's Day have been noted since at least the 1960s, when many men were reported to "have been agitating privately to make 23 February International Men's Day, the equivalent of 8 March, which is International Women's Day"
Revised:  , International Men’s Day is not officially recognized by the United Nations, which observes World Toilet Day on November URL Early background Calls for an International Men's Day have been noted since at least the 1960s, when many men were reported to "have been agitating privately to make 23 February International Men's Day, the equivalent of 8 March, which is International Women's Day"
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