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Original:  He retired as the Twins' all-time leader in hits, doubles, total bases, at-bats and runs, and still holds all of those records despite his career being shortened when glaucoma left him blind in one eye before the 1996 season . Puckett had gained weight in recent years,  was reportedly still suffering from a bitter divorce in 2002, and was still depressed about his career being cut short.
Revised:  He retired as the Twins' all-time leader in hits, doubles, total bases, at-bats and runs, records that he still holds to this day. Unfortunately, his playing career was cut short in 1996, when he was diagnosed with glaucoma, which has left him blind in one eye before the 1996 season . Puckett had gained weight in recent years, was reportedly still suffering from a bitter divorce in 2002, and was still depressed about his career being cut short.
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Original:  He retired as the Twins' all-time leader in hits, doubles, total bases, at-bats and runs, and still holds all of those records despite his career being shortened when glaucoma left him blind in one eye before the 1996 season . Puckett had gained weight in recent years,  was reportedly still suffering from a bitter divorce in 2002, and was still depressed about his career being cut short.
Revised:  He retired as the Twins' all-time leader in hits, doubles, total bases, at-bats and runs, and still holds all of those records despite his career being shortened when glaucoma left him blind in one eye . Even though his career was considerably shorter than those of most inductees, he was still inducted into the Baseball Hall of Fame in 2001 (his first year of elegibility) . Puckett had gained weight in recent years, was reportedly still suffering from a bitter divorce in 2002, and was still depressed about his career being cut short.
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Original:  He retired as the Twins' all-time leader in hits, doubles, total bases, at-bats and runs, and still holds all of those records despite his career being shortened when glaucoma left him blind in one eye before the 1996 season . Puckett had gained weight in recent years,  was reportedly still suffering from a bitter divorce in 2002, and was still depressed about his career being cut short.
Revised:  He retired as the Twins' all-time leader in hits, doubles, total bases, at-bats and runs, and still holds all of those records despite his career being shortened when glaucoma left him blind in one eye before the 1996 season . Puckett had gained weight in recent years, and was reportedly still suffering from a bitter divorce in 2002, and was still depressed about his career being cut short.
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Original:  Data from the Australian Bureau of Statistics show.
Revised:  Australian Bureau of Statistics show.
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Original:  The share of Australian men who are overweight or obese is 62 per cent and overweight or obese women 45 per cent .
Revised:  The share of Australian men who are overweight or obese is 62 per cent and overweight or obese women 45 percent .
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Original:  Standards Australia , is considering recommending strengthening loos for larger users.
Revised:  Standards Australia is considering recommending strengthening loos for larger users.
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Original:  "They will re-look at what the statistics are on weights of people, they will re-look at that rigidity load and then that document will go to public comment, so obviously the experts out there will have an opportunity to re-look and see whether that load is appropriate," said colin Blair.
Revised:  "They will re-look at what the statistics are on weights of people, they will re-look at that rigidity load and then that document will go to public comment, so obviously the experts out there will have an opportunity to re-look and see whether that load is appropriate," said Colin Blair.
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Original:  The number of females who are considered overweight or obsese rose 8 percent to 45 percent.
Revised:  The number of females who are considered overweight or obese rose 8 percent to 45 percent.
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Original:  Standards Australia, the non-government standards setting organisation in Australia has indicated that it is reviewing the weight limit for toilet seats as they need to accomodate the "increasing size of humans".
Revised:  Standards Australia, the non-government standards setting organization in Australia has indicated that it is reviewing the weight limit for toilet seats as they need to accomodate the "increasing size of humans".
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Original:  Standards Australia, the non-government standards setting organization in Australia has indicated that it is reviewing the weight limit for toilet seats as they need to accomodate the "increasing size of humans".
Revised:  Standards Australia, the non-government standards setting organisation in Australia has indicated that it is reviewing the weight limit for toilet seats as they need to accomodate the "increasing size of humans".
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Original: French troops will end Afghan combat role a year early in 2013 Speaking yesterday after a meeting with President , President announced that security for , where the majority of France's 3600 troops are based, will be transferred to Afghan control in March, France will also end it's combat mission in 2013  a year earlier than planned.
Revised: French troops will end Afghan combat role a year early in 2013 Speaking yesterday after a meeting with President , President announced that security for , where the majority of France's 3600 troops are based, will be transferred to Afghan control in March, and France will end its combat mission in 2013 a year earlier than planned.
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Original: French troops will end Afghan combat role a year early in 2013 Speaking yesterday after a meeting with President , President announced that security for , where the majority of France's 3600 troops are based, will be transferred to Afghan control in March, France will also end it's combat mission in 2013  a year earlier than planned.
Revised: French troops will end Afghan combat role a year early in 2013 Speaking yesterday after a meeting with President , President announced that security for , where the majority of France's 3600 troops are based, will be transferred to Afghan control in March, France will also end it's combat mission in 2013 — a year earlier than planned.
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Original:  Following the death of four French soldiers at the hands of an Afghan soldier last week  Sarkozy had threatened the complete withdrawal of French troops this year.
Revised:  Following the death of four French soldiers at the hands of an Afghan soldier last week , Sarkozy had threatened the complete withdrawal of French troops this year.
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Original: United States and Philippines discuss enhanced defense cooperation The United States and the Philippines are discussing the possibility of enhanced defense cooperation , however there are no plans for bases along the lines of the former United Sttes bases at and .
Revised: United States and Philippines discuss enhanced defense cooperation The United States and the Philippines are discussing the possibility of enhanced defense cooperation . However, there are no plans for bases along the lines of the former United Sttes bases at and .
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Original: United States and Philippines discuss enhanced defense cooperation The United States and the Philippines are discussing the possibility of enhanced defense cooperation , however there are no plans for bases along the lines of the former United Sttes bases at and .
Revised: United States and Philippines discuss enhanced defense cooperation The United States and the Philippines are discussing the possibility of enhanced defense cooperation , however there are no plans for bases along the lines of the former United States bases at and .
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Original:  The talks come in the context of the 'return to Asia' strategy of the United States and increasingly belligerent Chinese claims to the waters of the South China Sea .
Revised:  The talks come in the context of the 'return to Asia' strategy of the United States and increasingly belligerent claims to the waters of the South China Sea .
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Original:  The talks come in the context of the 'return to Asia' strategy of the United States and increasingly belligerent Chinese claims to the waters of the South China Sea .
Revised:  The talks come in the context of the 'return to Asia' strategy of the United States and increasingly belligerent Chinese claims to the waters of the .
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Original: United States and Philippines discuss enhanced defense cooperation The and the are discussing the possibility of enhanced defense cooperation  .
Revised: United States and Philippines discuss enhanced defense cooperation The and the are discussing the possibility of enhanced defense cooperation , according to officials of both countries .
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Original: EU official resigns over anti-piracy treaty to the European Parliament has resigned yesterday in protest over the signing of the (ACTA) by 22 members of the  on Thursday.
Revised: EU official resigns over anti-piracy treaty to the European Parliament has resigned yesterday in protest over the signing of the (ACTA) by 22 members of the European Union on Thursday.
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Original:  United States and Philippines discuss enhanced defense cooperation The and the are discussing the possibility of enhanced defense cooperation, according to officials of both countries.
Revised:  United States and Philippines discuss enhanced defense cooperation The United States and the Philippines are discussing the possibility of enhanced defense cooperation, according to officials of both countries.
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Original: The shipment consisted of fourteen books which had been intentionally spaced out so as to place the cocaine in them , according to .
Revised: The shipment consisted of fourteen hollowed-out books with the cocaine inside , according to .
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Original:  At the main intake centre for the United Nations , police seized a shipment of two bags, containing sixteen kilograms of cocaine  on January 16. Spokespersons for and Ban Ki-moon, , Thursday released statements confirming the seizure.
Revised:  Spokespersons for and Ban Ki-moon, , Thursday released statements confirming a police seizure of a shipment of two bags, containing sixteen kilograms of cocaine on January 16. Spokespersons for and Ban Ki-moon, , Thursday released statements confirming the seizure.
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Original:  At the main intake centre for the United Nations , police seized a shipment of two bags, containing sixteen kilograms of cocaine  on January 16. Spokespersons for and Ban Ki-moon, , Thursday released statements confirming the seizure.
Revised:  At the main intake centre for the United Nations , police seized a shipment of two bags, containing sixteen kilograms of cocaine on January 16. 
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Original:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be created of a different material and would be of a greater size than the shipment sent to the UN
Revised:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be created of a different material and would be of a greater size than the bag packaging sent to the UN
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Original: Speaking on behalf of Ki-moon, Martin Nesirky stated about the shipment : "The United Nations nor anyone located in the United Nations was the intended recipient of this delivery and the bags were not UN bags, diplomatic or other". , Under-Secretary-General for Safety and Security at the United Nations, also believed that there was "nothing to indicate that this had anything to do with anybody at the United Nations";
Revised: Speaking on behalf of Ki-moon, Martin Nesirky stated : "The United Nations nor anyone located in the United Nations was the intended recipient of this delivery and the bags were not UN bags, diplomatic or other". , Under-Secretary-General for Safety and Security at the United Nations, also believed that there was "nothing to indicate that this had anything to do with anybody at the United Nations";
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Original:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be created of a different material and would be of a greater size than the bag packaging sent to the UN
Revised:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be of a different material and would be of a greater size than the bag packaging sent to the UN
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Original:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be created of a different material and would be of a greater size than the bag packaging sent to the UN
Revised:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be created of a different material and a greater size than the bag packaging sent to the UN
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Original:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be created of a different material and would be of a greater size than the bag packaging sent to the UN
Revised:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be created of a different material and would be of a greater size than those sent to the UN
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Original:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be of a different material and a greater size than those sent to the UN . Cocaine is yumm
Revised:  According to , a genuine UN diplomatic bag would be of a different material and a greater size than those sent to the UN 
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Original: Yush4enko-Smirnov On March 3, Ukraine instituted a new customs regime at the border with Transnistria.
Revised:  On March 3, Ukraine instituted a new customs regime at the border with Transnistria.
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Original:  Trade between Transnistria and Ukraine totals about  $400 million
Revised:  Trade between Transnistria and Ukraine totals about US $400 million
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Original: Professor Myers and colleague Andrew H. Knoll say that what we do now will define a course for evolution.
Revised: Professor Myers and colleague Andrew H. Knoll say that we now will define a course for evolution.
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Original: Hotspots 320px| GLOBAL WARMING: Global mean surface temperatures 1856 to 2005The Australia Museum's Frank Howarth says "There are over 30 extinction 'hotspots' across the globe.
Revised: Hotspots 320px| Global mean surface temperatures 1856 to 2005The Australia Museum's Frank Howarth says "There are over 30 extinction 'hotspots' across the globe.
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Original:  There were as few as 750 bison in 1890 from overhunting.
Revised:  There were as few as 750 bison in 1890 due to overhunting.
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Original:  Scheiner says the message goes beyond amphibians: "global warming and the accompanying emergence of infectious diseases are a real and immediate threat to biodiversity and a growing challenge for humankind."
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Original:  Image:Bufo periglenes1.jpg| EXTINCT: The Golden Toad of Monteverde, Costa Rica was among the first casualties of amphibian declines .
Revised:  EXTINCT: The Golden Toad of Monteverde, Costa Rica was among the first casualties of amphibian declines .
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Original:  Image:Bufo periglenes1.jpg| EXTINCT: The Golden Toad of Monteverde, Costa Rica was among the first casualties of amphibian declines .
Revised:  Image:Bufo periglenes1.jpg| EXTINCT: The Golden Toad of Monteverde, Costa Rica was among the first casualties of .
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Original: Dana Reeve, the widow of Superman actor and paraplegia advocate Christopher Reeve , died of lung cancer late Monday.
Revised: Dana Reeve, the widow of Superman actor and paraplegia advocate , died of lung cancer late Monday.
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Original: Dana Reeve, the widow of Christopher Reeve who played the character Superman and paraplegia advocate , died of lung cancer late Monday.
Revised: Dana Reeve, the widow of Christopher Reeve , died of lung cancer late Monday.
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Original:  Reeve helped to fight for better treatments and to find a cure for paralysis through the Christopher Reeve Foundation .
Revised:  Reeve served as chairwoman of the Christopher Reeve Foundation .
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Original:  She and her late husband, known for playing Superman, became paraplegia advocates after his own spinal injury in 1995.
Revised:  She and her late husband, famed for his movie acting role of Superman, became paraplegia advocates after his own spinal injury in 1995.
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Original:  She and her late husband, known for playing Superman, became paraplegia advocates after his own spinal injury in 1995.
Revised:  She and her late husband, known for playing Superman, became an advocate for paraplegics when he suffered a spinal injury in 1995.
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Original: Reeve is survived by her 13 year-old son, Will;
Revised: Reeve is survived by her 13-year-old son, Will;
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Original:  Officials say that the area has been cordoned off and the injured have been taken to thr SS Hospital on the Benaras Hindu University campus.
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Original:  The seond explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi  
Revised:  The seond explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi . 
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Original:  Officials say that the area has been cordoned off and the injured have been shifted to a Hospital on the Benaras Hindu University campus   
Revised:  Officials say that the area has been cordoned off and the injured have been shifted to a Hospital on the Benaras Hindu University campus . 
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Original:  He is constantly monitoring the situation.  
Revised:  He is constantly monitoring the situation. " 
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Original:  He is constantly monitoring the situation.  
Revised:  He is constantly monitoring the situation. hell
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Original: At least fifteen people are feared dead , and at least sixty others are wounded after three explosions in the Hindu pilgrimage town of Varanasi, India.
Revised: At least fifteen people are feared dead and at least sixty others are wounded after three explosions in the Hindu pilgrimage town of Varanasi, India.
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Original:  At approximately 6:00p.m. the first explosion occurred outside the  Sankat Mochan temple which was crowded with devotees .
Revised:  At approximately 6:00p.m. the first explosion occurred outside the crowded Sankat Mochan temple which was crowded with devotees .
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Original:  At approximately 6:00p.m. the first explosion occurred outside the  Sankat Mochan temple which was crowded with devotees .
Revised:  At approximately 6:00p.m. the first explosion occurred outside the Sankat Mochan temple .
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Original:  The second explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster leaving a crater  and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi.
Revised:  The second took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster leaving a crater and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi.
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Original:  The second explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster leaving a crater  and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi.
Revised:  The second explosion took place just minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster leaving a crater and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi.
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Original:  The second explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster leaving a crater  and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi.
Revised:  The second explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station , leaving a crater and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi.
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Original:  The second explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster leaving a crater  and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi.
Revised:  The second explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster leaving a crater and the third occurred on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi.
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Original:  The second explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster leaving a crater  and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which at the time, was leaving for New Delhi.
Revised:  The second explosion took place just a few minutes later at the Cantonment Railway Station right outside the room of the stationmaster leaving a crater and the third explosion took place on the Shiv Ganga Express, which had been leaving for New Delhi.
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Original:  Officials say that the area has been cordoned off and the injured have been shifted to a Hospital on the Benaras Hindu University campus.
Revised:  Officials say that the area has been cordoned off and the injured have been shifted to a hospital on the Benaras Hindu University campus.
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Original:  Officials also say that at least 4 bombs that did not explode were found near a holy site by the Ganges River.
Revised:  They also report that at least 4 bombs that did not explode were found near a holy site by the Ganges River.
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Original:  Officials also say that at least 4 bombs that did not explode were found near a holy site by the Ganges River.
Revised:  Officials also say that at least 4 unexploded bombs were found near a holy site by the Ganges River.
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Original:  According to the media advisor Sanjay Baru, Prime Minister Manmohan "has appealed for peace and calm.
Revised:  According to media advisor Sanjay Baru, Prime Minister Manmohan "has appealed for peace and calm.
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Original:  At least five people have been injured and so far no fatalities have been reported.
Revised:  At least five people have been injured and no fatalities were been reported.
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Original:  Both lanes of traffic have been shutdown
Revised:  Both lanes of traffic were shutdown for several hours
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Original:  “I hope for the sake of Ontario, the provincial government takes this situation as seriously as we are and takes action as necessary.  
Revised:  “I hope for the sake of Ontario, the provincial government takes this situation as seriously as we are and takes action as necessary. ” 
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Original:  According to the Daily Telegraph,
Revised:  According to The Daily Telegraph,
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Original:  The police have not identified the journalists, but the BBC claim that they are Fergus Shanahan, ex-deputy editor of The Sun;
Revised:  The police have not identified the journalists, but the BBC claim they are Fergus Shanahan, ex-deputy editor of The Sun;
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