wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Ming Taizu was very happy , and gave him the courtesy name dingshi 鼎石.
Revised:  Ming Taizu was very happy , and gave him the courtesy name Dingshi 鼎石.
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Original:  When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave him military rations and supplies , and never stopped .
Revised:  When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave them military rations and supplies , and never stopped .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave him military rations and supplies , and never stopped .
Revised:  When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave him military rations and supplies .
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  In the third year of Jianwen (1400) Li Jinglong lost at Baigou river, he rode his horse alone to escape to Dezhou, the guards at the gate saw him and they despaired at his loss .
Revised:  In the third year of Jianwen (1400) , Li Jinglong was defeated at Baigou River. He escaped alone on horseback to Dezhou, where the guards at the gate saw him and they despaired at his loss .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In the third year of Jianwen (1400) Li Jinglong lost at Baigou river, he rode his horse alone to escape to Dezhou, the guards at the gate saw him and they despaired at his loss .
Revised:  In the third year of Jianwen (1400) Li Jinglong lost at Baigou river, he rode his horse alone to escape to Dezhou, the guards at the gate saw him and despaired at his loss .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In the third year of Jianwen (1400) Li Jinglong lost at Baigou river, he rode his horse alone to escape to Dezhou, the guards at the gate saw him and they despaired at his loss .
Revised:  In the third year of Jianwen (1400) Li Jinglong lost at Baigou river, he rode his horse alone to escape to Dezhou, the guards at the gate saw him and they despaired at his losses .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Tie Xuan and the ones who helped the army of Gao Yi felt sad over this, were crying with both of their eyes, he went from Linyi straight to Jinan, with Sheng Yong, Song Can's army to fight to the death in defense.
Revised:  Tie Xuan and those who helped the army of Gao Yi felt sad over this, were crying with both of their eyes, he went from Linyi straight to Jinan, with Sheng Yong, Song Can's army to fight to the death in defense.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Tie Xuan and the ones who helped the army of Gao Yi felt sad over this, were crying with both of their eyes, he went from Linyi straight to Jinan, with Sheng Yong, Song Can's army to fight to the death in defense.
Revised:  Tie Xuan and the ones who helped the army of Gao Yi were also deeply saddened. He went from Linyi straight to Jinan, with Sheng Yong, Song Can's army to fight to the death in defense.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“鐵鉉，鄧人。洪武中，由國子生授禮科給事中，調都督府斷事。嘗讞疑獄，立白。太祖喜，字之曰「鼎石」。建文初，為山東參政。李景隆之北伐也，鉉督餉無乏。景隆兵敗白溝河，單騎走德州，城戍皆望風潰。鉉與參軍高巍感奮涕泣，自臨邑趨濟南，偕盛庸、宋參軍等誓以死守。燕兵攻德州，景隆走依鉉。德州陷，燕兵收其儲蓄百餘萬，勢益張。遂攻濟南，景隆復大敗，南奔。” Fight against the Yan army On  15th day of the 5th month the Yan army attacked Jinan, and Tie Xuan and Sheng Yong stood to defend the city.
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“鐵鉉，鄧人。洪武中，由國子生授禮科給事中，調都督府斷事。嘗讞疑獄，立白。太祖喜，字之曰「鼎石」。建文初，為山東參政。李景隆之北伐也，鉉督餉無乏。景隆兵敗白溝河，單騎走德州，城戍皆望風潰。鉉與參軍高巍感奮涕泣，自臨邑趨濟南，偕盛庸、宋參軍等誓以死守。燕兵攻德州，景隆走依鉉。德州陷，燕兵收其儲蓄百餘萬，勢益張。遂攻濟南，景隆復大敗，南奔。” Fight against the Yan army On the 15th day of the 5th month the Yan army attacked Jinan, and Tie Xuan and Sheng Yong stood to defend the city.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“鐵鉉，鄧人。洪武中，由國子生授禮科給事中，調都督府斷事。嘗讞疑獄，立白。太祖喜，字之曰「鼎石」。建文初，為山東參政。李景隆之北伐也，鉉督餉無乏。景隆兵敗白溝河，單騎走德州，城戍皆望風潰。鉉與參軍高巍感奮涕泣，自臨邑趨濟南，偕盛庸、宋參軍等誓以死守。燕兵攻德州，景隆走依鉉。德州陷，燕兵收其儲蓄百餘萬，勢益張。遂攻濟南，景隆復大敗，南奔。” Fight against the Yan army On  15th day of the 5th month the Yan army attacked Jinan, and Tie Xuan and Sheng Yong stood to defend the city.
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“鐵鉉，鄧人。洪武中，由國子生授禮科給事中，調都督府斷事。嘗讞疑獄，立白。太祖喜，字之曰「鼎石」。建文初，為山東參政。李景隆之北伐也，鉉督餉無乏。景隆兵敗白溝河，單騎走德州，城戍皆望風潰。鉉與參軍高巍感奮涕泣，自臨邑趨濟南，偕盛庸、宋參軍等誓以死守。燕兵攻德州，景隆走依鉉。德州陷，燕兵收其儲蓄百餘萬，勢益張。遂攻濟南，景隆復大敗，南奔。” Fight against the Yan army On 15th day of the 5th month Zhu Di's army attacked Jinan, and Tie Xuan and Sheng Yong stood to defend the city.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“鐵鉉，鄧人。洪武中，由國子生授禮科給事中，調都督府斷事。嘗讞疑獄，立白。太祖喜，字之曰「鼎石」。建文初，為山東參政。李景隆之北伐也，鉉督餉無乏。景隆兵敗白溝河，單騎走德州，城戍皆望風潰。鉉與參軍高巍感奮涕泣，自臨邑趨濟南，偕盛庸、宋參軍等誓以死守。燕兵攻德州，景隆走依鉉。德州陷，燕兵收其儲蓄百餘萬，勢益張。遂攻濟南，景隆復大敗，南奔。” Fight against the Yan army On  15th day of the 5th month the Yan army attacked Jinan, and Tie Xuan and Sheng Yong stood to defend the city.
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“鐵鉉，鄧人。洪武中，由國子生授禮科給事中，調都督府斷事。嘗讞疑獄，立白。太祖喜，字之曰「鼎石」。建文初，為山東參政。李景隆之北伐也，鉉督餉無乏。景隆兵敗白溝河，單騎走德州，城戍皆望風潰。鉉與參軍高巍感奮涕泣，自臨邑趨濟南，偕盛庸、宋參軍等誓以死守。燕兵攻德州，景隆走依鉉。德州陷，燕兵收其儲蓄百餘萬，勢益張。遂攻濟南，景隆復大敗，南奔。” Fight against the Yan army On 15th day of the 5th month the Yan army attacked Jinan, and Tie Xuan and Sheng Yong defended the city.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Zhu Di ’s letter arrived which urged them to surrender  but it failed.
Revised:  Zhu Di sent them a letter urging them to surrender but it failed.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Zhu Di ’s letter arrived which urged them to surrender  but it failed.
Revised:  Zhu Di ’s letter arrived which urged them to surrender , but it failed.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“燕師遂圍濟南，鉉與庸等乘城守禦。王知不可驟克，令射書城中趣降。” On  17th day of the 5th month the Yan army diverted a river by digging into the river embankment and released water into the city.
Revised: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“燕師遂圍濟南，鉉與庸等乘城守禦。王知不可驟克，令射書城中趣降。” On the 17th day of the 5th month the Yan army diverted a river by digging into the river embankment and released water into the city.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“燕師遂圍濟南，鉉與庸等乘城守禦。王知不可驟克，令射書城中趣降。” On  17th day of the 5th month the Yan army diverted a river by digging into the river embankment and released water into the city.
Revised: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“燕師遂圍濟南，鉉與庸等乘城守禦。王知不可驟克，令射書城中趣降。” On 17th day of the 5th month the Yan army diverted a river by digging into its embankment and released water into the city.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明太宗實錄》（卷6）：“辛巳，隄水灌濟南城。” Tie Xuan saw that the situation in the turn of events was not encouraging, he decided to send 1,000 men to feign surrender.
Revised: 《明太宗實錄》（卷6）：“辛巳，隄水灌濟南城。” Tie Xuan , realizing that the situation in the turn of events was not encouraging, he decided to send 1,000 men to feign surrender.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明太宗實錄》（卷6）：“辛巳，隄水灌濟南城。” Tie Xuan saw that the situation in the turn of events was not encouraging, he decided to send 1,000 men to feign surrender.
Revised: 《明太宗實錄》（卷6）：“辛巳，隄水灌濟南城。” Tie Xuan saw that the situation was not encouraging, he decided to send 1,000 men to feign surrender.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明太宗實錄》（卷6）：“辛巳，隄水灌濟南城。” Tie Xuan saw that the situation in the turn of events was not encouraging, he decided to send 1,000 men to feign surrender.
Revised: 《明太宗實錄》（卷6）：“辛巳，隄水灌濟南城。” Tie Xuan saw that the situation in the turn of events was not encouraging, sent 1,000 men to feign surrender.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Tie Xuan ordered  his warriors to lie in ambush on top of the city walls , to wait for Zhu Di to enter , they were to throw down iron panels to attack him, together with an additional ambush at the broken bridge.
Revised:  Tie Xuan ordered his warriors to lie on top of the city walls , to wait for Zhu Di to enter , they were to throw down iron panels to attack him, together with an additional ambush at the broken bridge.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Tie Xuan ordered  his warriors to lie in ambush on top of the city walls , to wait for Zhu Di to enter , they were to throw down iron panels to attack him, together with an additional ambush at the broken bridge.
Revised:  Tie Xuan ordered his warriors to lie in ambush on top of the city walls and wait for Zhu Di to enter , they were to throw down iron panels to attack him, together with an additional ambush at the broken bridge.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Tie Xuan ordered  his warriors to lie in ambush on top of the city walls , to wait for Zhu Di to enter , they were to throw down iron panels to attack him, together with an additional ambush at the broken bridge.
Revised:  Tie Xuan ordered his warriors to lie in ambush on top of the city walls , to wait for Zhu Di to enter . They were to ambush him by throwing down iron panels to attack him, together with an additional ambush at the broken bridge.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Tie Xuan ordered  his warriors to lie in ambush on top of the city walls , to wait for Zhu Di to enter , they were to throw down iron panels to attack him, together with an additional ambush at the broken bridge.
Revised:  Tie Xuan ordered his warriors to lie in ambush on top of the city walls , to wait for Zhu Di to enter , they were to throw down iron panels ; a supporting ambush was tp take place at the broken bridge.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The hidden troops for the ambush were exposed, the bridge between was also not yet cut off, Zhu Di urged his horse to run quickly and go.
Revised:  The troops hidden for the ambush were exposed, the bridge between was also not yet cut off, Zhu Di urged his horse to run quickly and go.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Zhu Di was absolutely furious, he decided to employ cannon to besiege and bombard the city.
Revised:  Furious, Zhu Di decided to use cannon to bombard the city.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets  "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" 高皇帝神牌 several times and hanged down on the top of the city walls , the Yan army was obliged to cease  bombardment.
Revised:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets , "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" 高皇帝神牌 several times and hanged down on the top of the city walls , the Yan army was obliged to cease bombardment.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets  "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" 高皇帝神牌 several times and hanged down on the top of the city walls , the Yan army was obliged to cease  bombardment.
Revised:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" 高皇帝神牌 several times and hung them down from the top of the city walls , the Yan army was obliged to cease bombardment.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets  "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" 高皇帝神牌 several times and hanged down on the top of the city walls , the Yan army was obliged to cease  bombardment.
Revised:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" 高皇帝神牌 several times and hanged down on the top of the city walls . The Yan army was obliged to cease bombardment.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets  "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" 高皇帝神牌 several times and hanged down on the top of the city walls , the Yan army was obliged to cease  bombardment.
Revised:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" 高皇帝神牌 several times and hanged down on the top of the city walls , the Yan army was obliged to cease the bombardment.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“初，燕王之攻真定也，三日不下，即解兵去。惟自以得濟南足以斷南北道，即不下金陵，畫疆自守，亦足以徐圖江、淮，故乘此大破景隆之銳，盡力攻之，期於必拔。不意鉉等屢挫其鋒，又令守陴者詈燕，燕王益憤，乃以大炮攻城。城中不支，鉉書高皇帝神牌，懸之城上，燕師不敢擊。” After more than three months of the city under siege, Jinan was still strongly defending its position .
Revised: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“初，燕王之攻真定也，三日不下，即解兵去。惟自以得濟南足以斷南北道，即不下金陵，畫疆自守，亦足以徐圖江、淮，故乘此大破景隆之銳，盡力攻之，期於必拔。不意鉉等屢挫其鋒，又令守陴者詈燕，燕王益憤，乃以大炮攻城。城中不支，鉉書高皇帝神牌，懸之城上，燕師不敢擊。” After more than three months under siege, Jinan was still strongly defending its position .
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“初，燕王之攻真定也，三日不下，即解兵去。惟自以得濟南足以斷南北道，即不下金陵，畫疆自守，亦足以徐圖江、淮，故乘此大破景隆之銳，盡力攻之，期於必拔。不意鉉等屢挫其鋒，又令守陴者詈燕，燕王益憤，乃以大炮攻城。城中不支，鉉書高皇帝神牌，懸之城上，燕師不敢擊。” After more than three months of the city under siege, Jinan was still strongly defending its position .
Revised: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“初，燕王之攻真定也，三日不下，即解兵去。惟自以得濟南足以斷南北道，即不下金陵，畫疆自守，亦足以徐圖江、淮，故乘此大破景隆之銳，盡力攻之，期於必拔。不意鉉等屢挫其鋒，又令守陴者詈燕，燕王益憤，乃以大炮攻城。城中不支，鉉書高皇帝神牌，懸之城上，燕師不敢擊。” After more than three months of the city under siege, Jinan continued to defend itself .
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“鉉與庸等乘城守禦。燕兵堤水灌城，築長圍，晝夜攻擊。鉉以計焚其攻具，間出兵奮擊。又遣千人出城詐降。燕王大喜，軍中皆歡呼。鉉伏壯士城上，候王入，下鐵板擊之。別設伏、斷橋。既而失約，王未入城板驟下。王驚走，伏發，橋倉卒不可斷，王鞭馬馳去。憤甚，百計進攻。凡三閱月，卒固守不能下。當是時，平安統兵二十萬，將復德州，以絕燕餉道。燕王懼，解圍北歸。”。 Zhu Di himself launched his troops again , the offensive was set and determined,  after less than two days, he abandoned it and went .
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“鉉與庸等乘城守禦。燕兵堤水灌城，築長圍，晝夜攻擊。鉉以計焚其攻具，間出兵奮擊。又遣千人出城詐降。燕王大喜，軍中皆歡呼。鉉伏壯士城上，候王入，下鐵板擊之。別設伏、斷橋。既而失約，王未入城板驟下。王驚走，伏發，橋倉卒不可斷，王鞭馬馳去。憤甚，百計進攻。凡三閱月，卒固守不能下。當是時，平安統兵二十萬，將復德州，以絕燕餉道。燕王懼，解圍北歸。”。 Zhu Di himself launched his troops again . The offensive was set and determined, after less than two days, he abandoned it and went .
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“鉉與庸等乘城守禦。燕兵堤水灌城，築長圍，晝夜攻擊。鉉以計焚其攻具，間出兵奮擊。又遣千人出城詐降。燕王大喜，軍中皆歡呼。鉉伏壯士城上，候王入，下鐵板擊之。別設伏、斷橋。既而失約，王未入城板驟下。王驚走，伏發，橋倉卒不可斷，王鞭馬馳去。憤甚，百計進攻。凡三閱月，卒固守不能下。當是時，平安統兵二十萬，將復德州，以絕燕餉道。燕王懼，解圍北歸。”。 Zhu Di himself launched his troops again , the offensive was set and determined,  after less than two days, he abandoned it and went .
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“鉉與庸等乘城守禦。燕兵堤水灌城，築長圍，晝夜攻擊。鉉以計焚其攻具，間出兵奮擊。又遣千人出城詐降。燕王大喜，軍中皆歡呼。鉉伏壯士城上，候王入，下鐵板擊之。別設伏、斷橋。既而失約，王未入城板驟下。王驚走，伏發，橋倉卒不可斷，王鞭馬馳去。憤甚，百計進攻。凡三閱月，卒固守不能下。當是時，平安統兵二十萬，將復德州，以絕燕餉道。燕王懼，解圍北歸。”。 Zhu Di himself launched his troops again , the offensive was set and determined, but after less than two days, he abandoned it and went .
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“鉉與庸等乘城守禦。燕兵堤水灌城，築長圍，晝夜攻擊。鉉以計焚其攻具，間出兵奮擊。又遣千人出城詐降。燕王大喜，軍中皆歡呼。鉉伏壯士城上，候王入，下鐵板擊之。別設伏、斷橋。既而失約，王未入城板驟下。王驚走，伏發，橋倉卒不可斷，王鞭馬馳去。憤甚，百計進攻。凡三閱月，卒固守不能下。當是時，平安統兵二十萬，將復德州，以絕燕餉道。燕王懼，解圍北歸。”。 Zhu Di himself launched his troops again , the offensive was set and determined,  after less than two days, he abandoned it and went .
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“鉉與庸等乘城守禦。燕兵堤水灌城，築長圍，晝夜攻擊。鉉以計焚其攻具，間出兵奮擊。又遣千人出城詐降。燕王大喜，軍中皆歡呼。鉉伏壯士城上，候王入，下鐵板擊之。別設伏、斷橋。既而失約，王未入城板驟下。王驚走，伏發，橋倉卒不可斷，王鞭馬馳去。憤甚，百計進攻。凡三閱月，卒固守不能下。當是時，平安統兵二十萬，將復德州，以絕燕餉道。燕王懼，解圍北歸。”。 Zhu Di himself launched his troops again , the offensive was set and determined, after less than two days, he abandoned it and departed .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He believed only through taking Jinan could he cut off north south passage, on the  spot he delimited the boundary and guard, it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it , consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash, with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan, but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
Revised:  He believed that only by taking Jinan could he cut off north south passage, on the spot he delimited the boundary and guard, it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it , consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash, with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan, but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
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Original:  He believed only through taking Jinan could he cut off north south passage, on the  spot he delimited the boundary and guard, it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it , consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash, with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan, but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
Revised:  He believed only through taking Jinan could he cut off the spot he delimited the boundary and guard, it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it , consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash, with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan, but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
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Original:  He believed only through taking Jinan could he cut off north south passage, on the  spot he delimited the boundary and guard, it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it , consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash, with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan, but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
Revised:  He believed only through taking Jinan could he cut off north south passage, on the north-south passage. On the spot he delimited the boundary and guard, it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it , consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash, with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan, but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
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Original:  He believed only through taking Jinan could he cut off north south passage, on the  spot he delimited the boundary and guard, it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it , consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash, with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan, but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
Revised:  He believed only through taking Jinan could he cut off north south passage, on the spot he delimited the boundary and guard, it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it . Consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash, with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan, but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
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Original:  The Jianwen Emperor heard this and was very pleased , he dispatched an official to go and show appreciation, to bestow gold, to confer upon him the title the third 三世.
Revised:  The Jianwen Emperor heard this and was very pleased . He dispatched an official to go and show appreciation, to bestow gold, to confer upon him the title the third 三世.
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Original:  Tie Xuan entered the palace to pay respect and thank, the Jianwen emperor again bestowed upon him a banquet and reception.
Revised:  Tie Xuan entered the palace to pay his respects and offer thanks. The Jianwen emperor again bestowed upon him a banquet and reception.
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Original:  Tie Xuan entered the palace to pay respect and thank, the Jianwen emperor again bestowed upon him a banquet and reception.
Revised:  Tie Xuan entered the palace to pay respect and thank, the Jianwen emperor again honored him with a banquet and reception.
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Original:  All of Tie Xuan's suggestions were all imposed and adopted.
Revised:  All of Tie Xuan's suggestions were imposed and adopted.
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Original: 《明史》（卷111）：“十二月任督军。” 。 The Jianwen Emperor replaced Sheng Yong with Li Jinglong as Yan General, and he assigned Tie Xuan to participate in military affairs.
Revised: 《明史》（卷111）：“十二月任督军。” . The Jianwen Emperor replaced Sheng Yong with Li Jinglong as Yan General, and he assigned Tie Xuan to participate in military affairs.
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Original: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“九月，辛未，擢鐵鉉山東布政使，參贊軍務，尋進兵部尚書。封盛庸為曆城侯，授平燕將軍，以代景隆，都督陳暉、平安副之。詔庸屯德州，平安及吳傑屯定州，徐凱屯滄州，相為犄角以困北平。”《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“当世荣之时，李景隆以败军召还，命历城侯盛庸出印代之。铉趋朝谢恩蒙，赐宴碗肉，几所建白，皆如其言。陞山东布政使，不数日拜兵部尚书，参佐盛庸。凡运筹策申军政粮草，主将多倚藉之。” In that winter, Sheng Yong inflicted a defeat on Zhu Di in Dongchang , and beheaded his general Zhang Yu. Zhu Di fled back to Beiping (now Beijing).
Revised: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“九月，辛未，擢鐵鉉山東布政使，參贊軍務，尋進兵部尚書。封盛庸為曆城侯，授平燕將軍，以代景隆，都督陳暉、平安副之。詔庸屯德州，平安及吳傑屯定州，徐凱屯滄州，相為犄角以困北平。”《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“当世荣之时，李景隆以败军召还，命历城侯盛庸出印代之。铉趋朝谢恩蒙，赐宴碗肉，几所建白，皆如其言。陞山东布政使，不数日拜兵部尚书，参佐盛庸。凡运筹策申军政粮草，主将多倚藉之。” That winter, Sheng Yong inflicted a defeat on Zhu Di in Dongchang , and beheaded his general Zhang Yu. Zhu Di fled back to Beiping (now Beijing).
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Original: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“九月，辛未，擢鐵鉉山東布政使，參贊軍務，尋進兵部尚書。封盛庸為曆城侯，授平燕將軍，以代景隆，都督陳暉、平安副之。詔庸屯德州，平安及吳傑屯定州，徐凱屯滄州，相為犄角以困北平。”《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“当世荣之时，李景隆以败军召还，命历城侯盛庸出印代之。铉趋朝谢恩蒙，赐宴碗肉，几所建白，皆如其言。陞山东布政使，不数日拜兵部尚书，参佐盛庸。凡运筹策申军政粮草，主将多倚藉之。” In that winter, Sheng Yong inflicted a defeat on Zhu Di in Dongchang , and beheaded his general Zhang Yu. Zhu Di fled back to Beiping (now Beijing).
Revised: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“九月，辛未，擢鐵鉉山東布政使，參贊軍務，尋進兵部尚書。封盛庸為曆城侯，授平燕將軍，以代景隆，都督陳暉、平安副之。詔庸屯德州，平安及吳傑屯定州，徐凱屯滄州，相為犄角以困北平。”《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“当世荣之时，李景隆以败军召还，命历城侯盛庸出印代之。铉趋朝谢恩蒙，赐宴碗肉，几所建白，皆如其言。陞山东布政使，不数日拜兵部尚书，参佐盛庸。凡运筹策申军政粮草，主将多倚藉之。” In that winter, Sheng Yong defeated Zhu Di at Dongchang and beheaded his general Zhang Yu. Zhu Di fled back to Beiping (now Beijing).
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Original:  Since then, the Yan troops all went via Xuzhou, Pei county to go south , they would not dare again go via route of Shandong.
Revised:  Since then, the Yan troops all went via Xuzhou, Pei county to go south . They would not dare again go via route of Shandong.
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Original:  Since then, the Yan troops all went via Xuzhou, Pei county to go south , they would not dare again go via route of Shandong.
Revised:  Since then, the Yan troops all went via Xuzhou, Pei county to go south , they would not dare again to go via Shandong.
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Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated  he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated , he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
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Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated  he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated he was captured . Yet he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
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Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated  he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated he was captured , he refused to surrender . In court he sat with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
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