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Original:  In January 1908 he led a student protest against J. Lovell Murray, a Christian evangelist who was in Berkeley to give a talk titled "Awakening the Orient" organized by the local Y.M.C.A. Just before Murray was about to enter Stiles Hall to give his lecture, 16 of the 17 Indian students at UC Berkeley, including Mukerji, requested Murray to remove from his talk any references to the immorality of Hindu priests, and its use in the justification of the occupation of India by the British.
Revised:  In January 1908 he led a student protest against J. Lovell Murray, a Christian evangelist who was in Berkeley to give a talk titled "Awakening the Orient" organized by the local Y.M.C.A. Just before Murray was about to enter Stiles Hall to give his lecture, 16 of the 17 Indian students at UC Berkeley, including Mukerji, asked Murray to remove from his talk any references to the immorality of Hindu priests, and its use in the justification of the occupation of India by the British.
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Original: Student organizing In 1907, Mukerji co-founded the Association of Oriental Students at UC Berkeley, the first Asian American organization at the university, with members from India, Japan, China, and Thailand.
Revised: Student activism In 1907, Mukerji co-founded the Association of Oriental Students at UC Berkeley, the first Asian American organization at the university, with members from India, Japan, China, and Thailand.
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Original:  He served as the organization's President during at least 1907-1908.
Revised:  He served as the organization's president during at least 1907-1908.
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Original:  Mukerji then went on become a student at the University of California, Berkeley circa 1905.
Revised:  Mukerji moved to Berkeley, California in April 1904, hoping to study at the University of California, Berkeley circa 1905.
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Original:  His time at UC Berkeley was widely covered by American press .
Revised:  His time at UC Berkeley was widely covered by American newspapers .
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Original:  By 1909,  was living in Massachusetts, developing ideas to create a new library in India  .
Revised:  By 1909, he was living in Massachusetts, developing ideas to create a new library in India .
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Original:  In a 1911 article, Sarangadhar Das wrote that after graduating from UC Berkeley in 1908, Mukerji "worked as the Superindending (sic) Chemist in a sugar factory in Porto Rico, Cuba, and now is employed in the Bengal National College , " while in  1914, the Hindusthanee Student reported that he was "prospecting in the Central Provinces."
Revised:  Sarangadhar Das wrote that after graduating from UC Berkeley in 1908, Mukerji "worked as the Superindending (sic) Chemist in a sugar factory in Porto Rico, Cuba, and now is employed in the Bengal National College , " while in 1914, the Hindusthanee Student reported that he was "prospecting in the Central Provinces."
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Original:  In a 1911 article, Sarangadhar Das wrote that after graduating from UC Berkeley in 1908, Mukerji "worked as the Superindending (sic) Chemist in a sugar factory in Porto Rico, Cuba, and now is employed in the Bengal National College , " while in  1914, the Hindusthanee Student reported that he was "prospecting in the Central Provinces."
Revised:  In a 1911 article, Sarangadhar Das wrote that after graduating from UC Berkeley in 1908, Mukerji "worked as the Superindending (sic) Chemist in a sugar factory in Porto Rico, Cuba, and now is employed in the Bengal National College . " while in 1914, the Hindusthanee Student reported that he was "prospecting in the Central Provinces."
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Original:  In a 1911 article, Sarangadhar Das wrote that after graduating from UC Berkeley in 1908, Mukerji "worked as the Superindending (sic) Chemist in a sugar factory in Porto Rico, Cuba, and now is employed in the Bengal National College , " while in  1914, the Hindusthanee Student reported that he was "prospecting in the Central Provinces."
Revised:  In a 1911 article, Sarangadhar Das wrote that after graduating from UC Berkeley in 1908, Mukerji "worked as the Superindending (sic) Chemist in a sugar factory in Porto Rico, Cuba, and now is employed in the Bengal National College , " while in In 1914, the Hindusthanee Student reported that he was "prospecting in the Central Provinces."
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Original: Teshie Mankralo is often selected by three Houses in the Teshie land. the position is a very important one which almost every sound minded Teshienian aspire to occupy because it comes with great opportunities. hence this publication of the dailies(PUBLIC NOTICE - TESHIE MANKRALO) this is the acting mankralo of Teshe land in Ghana PUBLIC NOTICE
Revised: Teshie Mankralo is often selected by three Houses in the Teshie land. the position is a very important one which almost every sound minded Teshienian aspire to occupy because it comes with great opportunities. hence this publication of the dailies(PUBLIC NOTICE - TESHIE MANKRALO) PUBLIC NOTICE
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Original: Mankralo is a word in the Ghanian language that is used to describe a person of high authority in a community aside the king.
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Original:  Among the Gas of the Greater Accra Region, the responsibilities of a Mankralo, includes relaying of information about the happenings in the Town/Community to the people.
Revised:  Among the Gas of the Greater Accra Region, the mankralo is a person of high authority whose responsibilities include relaying information about happenings in the Town/Community to the people.
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Original:  Among the Gas of the Greater Accra Region, the responsibilities of a Mankralo, includes relaying of information about the happenings in the Town/Community to the people.
Revised:  Among the Gas of the Greater Accra Region, the responsibilities of a Mankralo, includes relaying of information about the happenings in the community to the people.
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Original:  PUBLIC NOTICE TESHIE MANKRALO STOOL AFFAIRS%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The three ruling houses of the mankralo stool of Teshie Krobo quarter namely, Nii Tetteh Otswe We, Nii Klu Din We and Nii Klu Tsuru We with the consent of Acting Mankralo and Teshie Krobo Dzaasetse who have the prerogative powers to install mankralo , wish to inform all stake holders and the general public that the next ruling house (NII KLU DIN WE)
Revised:  PUBLIC NOTICE %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The three ruling houses of the mankralo stool of Teshie Krobo quarter namely, Nii Tetteh Otswe We, Nii Klu Din We and Nii Klu Tsuru We with the consent of Acting Mankralo and Teshie Krobo Dzaasetse who have the prerogative powers to install mankralo , wish to inform all stake holders and the general public that the next ruling house (NII KLU DIN WE)
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Original:  The position carries great prestige because of the opportunities that accompany i 
Revised:  The position carries great prestige because of the opportunities that accompany it. 
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Original: Pierre Roland who was born Pierre Roland Christy , in Jakarta, Indonesia on 14 April 1979 , is an Indonesian actor.
Revised: Pierre Roland ( born Pierre Roland Christy , in Jakarta, Indonesia on 14 April 1979 , is an Indonesian actor.
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Original: Pierre Roland who was born Pierre Roland Christy , in Jakarta, Indonesia on 14 April 1979 , is an Indonesian actor.
Revised: Pierre Roland who was born Pierre Roland Christy ; 14 April 1979 , is an Indonesian actor.
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Original:  It is interested in how the immune system works, how vaccines prevent disease and why vaccines sometimes do not work and case adverse reaction
Revised:  It is interested in how the immune system works, how vaccines prevent disease and why vaccines sometimes do not work and cause adverse reaction
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Original: Veterinary Immunology studies all aspects of immune system in animals.
Revised: Veterinary Immunology studies all aspects of system in animals.
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Original:  It is a branch under biomedical science and related to zoology and veterinary sciences.
Revised:  It is a branch under science and related to zoology and veterinary sciences.
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Original: Veterinary Immunology studies all aspects of system in animals.
Revised: Veterinary Immunology studies all aspects of immune system in animals.
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Original:  It is interested in how the immune system works, how vaccines prevent disease and why vaccines sometimes do not work and cause adverse reaction 
Revised:  It is interested in how the immune system works, how vaccines prevent disease and why vaccines sometimes do not work and cause adverse reactions. 
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Original: Veterinary Immunology studies all aspects of immune system in animals.
Revised: Veterinary immunology is the study of all aspects of immune system in animals.
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Original:  Rungsung Suisa belonged to the Tangkhul Naga tribe.
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Original:  Rungsung Suisa (4 March 1907 – 17 April 1971) was an Indian politician.
Revised: 748 Rungsung Suisa (4 March 1907 – 17 April 1971) was an Indian politician.
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Original:  Hanja:韓昇旿, born in 1978) was aSouth Korean human rights activist and civil activist.
Revised:  Hanja:韓昇旿, born in 1978) was a South Korean human rights activist and civil activist.
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Original:  From July 26 to August 14, Han was Sung Jae-gi's Funeral and Case settled. but this did not rectify infighting so there was demand resignation from some member of Man of Korea.
Revised:  From July 26 to August 14, Han was Sung Jae-gi's funeral and case settled. but this did not rectify infighting so there was demand resignation from some member of Man of Korea.
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Original:  The AEI figures for various leading American sires are: Bold Ruler (leading sire from 1963-1969 and 1973) – 7.86 Nasrullah (1955, 1956, 1959, 1960) – 5.81 Alydar (1990) – 5.11 Nijinsky II – 4.49 Bull Lea (1947-9, 1952-3) – 4.37 Northern Dancer (1971, 1977) – 4.11 Danzig (1991-3) – 3.93 Mr. Prospector (1987-8) – 3.91 Storm Cat (1999, 2000) – 2.95 Halo (1983, 1989) - 2.91 A.P.
Revised:  The AEI figures for various leading American sires are: Bold Ruler (leading sire from 1963-1969 and 1973) – 7.86 Nasrullah (1955, 1956, 1959, 1960) – 5.81 Alydar (1990) – 5.11 Nijinsky – 4.49 Bull Lea (1947-9, 1952-3) – 4.37 Northern Dancer (1971, 1977) – 4.11 Danzig (1991-3) – 3.93 Mr. Prospector (1987-8) – 3.91 Storm Cat (1999, 2000) – 2.95 Halo (1983, 1989) - 2.91 A.P.
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Original: Average earnings index (AEI) is a popular statistic used in North American Thoroughbred horse breeding , but often misunderstood .
Revised: Average earnings index (AEI) is a popular statistic used in North American Thoroughbred horse breeding .
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Original:   The average earnings index measures the earning power of a stallion or mare's offspring by comparing the average earnings of a given horse's progeny with all other runners of the same age that raced in the same country in a given period of time.
Revised:  Method The average earnings index measures the earning power of a stallion or mare's offspring by comparing the average earnings of a given horse's progeny with all other runners of the same age that raced in the same country in a given period of time.
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Original: Although considered by some an industry standard, the AEI is criticized as easily skewed by the influence of a single exceptional horse in a given year and favors horses that throw "durable types" of horses that have multiple starts in a given year, including at lower-level races.
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Original:  It was only with the addition of computer power beginning in the 1970s and 1980s that a full analysis of mares could be added to the equations and determine the AEI for various crosses   .
Revised:  It was only with the addition of computer power beginning in the 1970s and 1980s that a full analysis of mares could be added to the equations and determine the AEI for various crosses . .
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Original:  Sunday Silence 's career AEI , according to the Jockey Club's online pedigree database, equineline.com,  is 2.55.
Revised:  Sunday Silence 's career AEI , according to the Jockey Club's online pedigree database, equineline.com, his AEI is 2.55.
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Original:  Sunday Silence's career AEI, according to Racing Post ( however Racing Post warns details of horses trained outside GB and Ireland may be incomplete) is 2.15.
Revised:  Sunday Silence's career AEI, according to Racing Post ( which warns that details of horses trained outside GB and Ireland may be incomplete) is 2.15.
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Original:  In 1931, Ledesma Ramos began publishing the periodical La Conquista del Estado, named in tribute to Curzio Malaparte's Italian Fascist magazine La Conquista dello Stato - one of the first publications of the Spanish National-Sindicalism.
Revised:  In 1931, Ledesma Ramos began publishing the periodical La Conquista del Estado, named in tribute to Curzio Malaparte's Italian Fascist magazine La Conquista dello Stato — one of the first publications of the Spanish National-Sindicalism.
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Original:  His admiration for National Socialism , brought him to imitate Adolf Hitler's hairstyle.
Revised:  His admiration for National Socialism brought him to imitate Adolf Hitler's hairstyle.
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Original: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
Revised: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
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Original: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
Revised: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 May 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
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Original: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
Revised: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
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Original: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
Revised: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
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Original: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
Revised: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
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Original: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
Revised: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
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Original: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
Revised: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
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Original: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . Ramiro Ledesma was one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
Revised: Ramiro Ledesma Ramos ( May 23 , 1905 , Alfaraz de Sayago, Zamora – October 29 , 1936 , Aravaca, Madrid ) was a Spanish national syndicalist philosopher, politician, writer, essayist, and journalist . , known as one of the key figures of Francoist propaganda.
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Original:  A mythical figure in the Francoist propaganda,  Ramiro Ledesma was nonetheless viewed with suspicion by the highly influential Roman Catholic Church—which had even threatened to censor his works through the Index Librorum Prohibitorum.
Revised:  One of the key figures of Francoist propaganda, Ramiro Ledesma was nonetheless viewed with suspicion by the highly influential Roman Catholic Church—which had even threatened to censor his works through the Index Librorum Prohibitorum.
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Original: His admiration for National Socialism brought him to imitate Adolf Hitler's hairstyle.
Revised: His admiration for Nazism brought him to imitate Adolf Hitler's hairstyle.
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Original: A part of the FLT under the leadership of Mussa early retaked its authonomy  ;
Revised: A part of the FLT under the leadership of Mussa retaked its authonomy ;
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Original: The Liberation Front of Chad (Front de Libération du Tchad or FLT) was an insurgent group active  during the first period of the Chadian Civil War (1966–1993) .
Revised: The Liberation Front of Chad (Front de Libération du Tchad or FLT) was an insurgent group active during the first phase of the Chadian Civil War (1966–1993) .
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Original: The Liberation Front of Chad (Front de Libération du Tchad or FLT) was an insurgent group active  during the first period of the Chadian Civil War (1966–1993) .
Revised: The Liberation Front of Chad (Front de Libération du Tchad or FLT) was an insurgent group active during the first period of the Chadian Civil War .
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Original:  She was  by her three stepsisters after he parents' deaths.
Revised:  She was raised by her three stepsisters after he parents' deaths.
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Original:  However, she settled for a position with a Japanese firm instead.
Revised:  She settled for a position with a Japanese firm instead.
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Original:  Jin Moyu's older brothers lost  of the Aisin Gioro family fortune in 1948 following the Chinese Civil War.
Revised:  Jin Moyu's older brothers lost most of the Aisin Gioro family fortune in 1948 following the Chinese Civil War.
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Original:  She also earned additionally income by selling knitted jumpers and taking out loans.
Revised:  She also earned additional income by selling knitted jumpers and taking out loans.
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Original:  In February 1958, Jin was arrested at her home and imprisoned, due solely to her relationship as a descendent of the former ruling Qing Dynasty imperial family.
Revised:  In February 1958, Jin was arrested at her home and imprisoned, due solely to her being a descendent of the former ruling Qing Dynasty imperial family.
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Original:  1918 – May 26, 2014), also known as Aisin Gioro Xianqi () or Aixinjueluo Xianqi , was a Chinese educator and the last surviving Manchu princess.
Revised:  1918 – May 26, 2014), also known as Aisin Gioro Xianqi () , was a Chinese educator and the last surviving Manchu princess.
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Original:  She was the 17th daughter of Shanqi, the 10th son of Prince Su of the Aisin Gioro clan, the imperial family that ruled China under the Qing dynasty, which ended with the Xinhai Revolution in 1911.
Revised:  She was the 17th daughter of Shanqi, the 10th son of Prince Su of the Aisin Gioro clan, the imperial clan of the Qing dynasty, which ended with the Xinhai Revolution in 1911.
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Original:  Jin's older sister was Yoshiko Kawashima, a Japanese spy who was executed by the Kuomintang as a traitor in March 1948.
Revised:  Jin's elder sister was Yoshiko Kawashima, a Japanese spy who was executed by the Kuomintang as a traitor in March 1948.
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Original:  Jin was born in Lüshun in 1918, seven years after the fall of the Qing Dynasty .
Revised:  Jin was born in Lüshun in 1918, seven years after the fall of the Qing dynasty .
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Original:  Jin Moyu's older brothers lost most of the Aisin Gioro family fortune in 1948 following the Chinese Civil War.
Revised:  Jin 's elder brothers lost most of the Aisin Gioro family fortune in 1948 following the Chinese Civil War.
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Original:  Jin Moyu's older brothers lost most of the Aisin Gioro family fortune in 1948 following the Chinese Civil War.
Revised:  Jin Moyu's older brothers lost most of the Aisin Gioro family fortune in 1948 after the Chinese Civil War.
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Original:  The brothers fled to British Hong Kong, leaving Jin Moyu to take care of the her six nieces and nephews, as well as Jin's own daughter and the family's elderly nanny.
Revised:  The brothers fled to British Hong Kong, leaving Jin to take care of the her six nieces and nephews, as well as Jin's own daughter and the family's elderly nanny.
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Original:  She opened her own restaurant specializing in Sichuan cuisine in 1952.
Revised:  Jin opened her own restaurant specializing in Sichuan cuisine in 1952.
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Original:  She opened her own restaurant specializing in Sichuan cuisine in 1952.
Revised:  She opened her own restaurant specialising in Sichuan cuisine in 1952.
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Original:  In February 1958, Jin was arrested at her home and imprisoned, due solely to her being a descendent of the former ruling Qing Dynasty imperial family.
Revised:  In February 1958, Jin was arrested at her home and imprisoned, due solely to her being a descendent of the former imperial family.
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Original:  She remained in prison for fifteen years, until her release as a forced farm laborer in 1973.
Revised:  She remained in prison for 15 years, until her release as a forced farm laborer in 1973.
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Original:  She remained in prison for fifteen years, until her release as a forced farm laborer in 1973.
Revised:  She remained in prison for fifteen years, until her release as a forced farm labourer in 1973.
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Original:  She and her second husband opened in school in Hebei in 1996.
Revised:  She and her second husband opened a school in Hebei in 1996.
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