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Original:  In addition to being expensive for sponsors and complicated for medical staff , this model resulted in a proliferation of laptop computers at many investigational sites that participated in more than one research study simultaneously . Usability and space constraints led to a lot of dissatisfaction among medical practitioners.
Revised:  This became expensive for sponsors and complicated for medical staff , this model resulted in a proliferation of laptop computers at many investigational sites that participated in more than one research study simultaneously . Usability and space constraints led to a lot of dissatisfaction among medical practitioners.
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Original:  In addition to being expensive for sponsors and complicated for medical staff , this model resulted in a proliferation of laptop computers at many investigational sites that participated in more than one research study simultaneously . Usability and space constraints led to a lot of dissatisfaction among medical practitioners.
Revised:  In addition to being expensive for sponsors and complicated for medical staff . Usability and space constraints led to a lot of dissatisfaction among medical practitioners.
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Original:  With the rise of the Internet in the mid-1990s, the obvious solution to some of these issues was the adoption of web-based software that could be accessed using existing computers at the investigational sites.
Revised:  With the rise of the internet in the mid-1990s, the obvious solution to some of these issues was the adoption of web-based software that could be accessed using existing computers at the investigational sites.
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Original: EDC can increase the data accuracy and decrease the time to collect data for studies of drugs and medical devices.
Revised: EDC can increase data accuracy and decrease the time to collect data for studies of drugs and medical devices.
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Original:  However, its origins might be tracked to a contract research organization known then as Institute for Biological Research and Development (IBRD). Dr . Nichol, Pickering, and Bollert offered "a controlled system for post-marketing surveillance (PMS) of newly approved (NDA) pharmaceutical products," with surveillance data being "entered into an electronic data base on site" at least as early as 1980.
Revised:  However, its origins might be tracked to a contract research organization known then as Institute for Biological Research and Development (IBRD). Drs . Nichol, Pickering, and Bollert offered "a controlled system for post-marketing surveillance (PMS) of newly approved (NDA) pharmaceutical products," with surveillance data being "entered into an electronic data base on site" at least as early as 1980.
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Original:  In 2005, Medrio was the first provider to offer cloud-based data storage.
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Original: Hedgehog Street RHS websiteThis was a the show garden at Hampton Court Flower Show about the Hedgehog Street conservation campaign.
Revised: Hedgehog Street RHS websiteThe show garden at Hampton Court Flower Show about the Hedgehog Street conservation campaign.
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Original:  Designed by Tracy Foster, it won gold and the People's Choice Award.
Revised:  Designed by Tracy Foster, it won a gold medal and the People's Choice Award.
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Original: Hedgehog Street RHS website  References
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Original: Hedgehog Street RHS website .
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Original:  The project was established in 2011 in response to a detected decline Hof, A. (2009) A study of the current status of the hedgehog (Erinaceus europaeus), and its decline in Great Britain since 1960, PhD ThesisRoos, S., Johnston, A. Noble, D. (2012) The State of Britain’s Hedgehogs, BTO Research Report No. 598The State of Britain’s Hedgehogs (2011) by David Wembridge, PTES in the hedgehog (Erinaceus europaeus) population in Britain, where it is a native species.
Revised:  The project was established in 2011 in response to a detected decline Hof, A. (2009) A study of the current status of the hedgehog (Erinaceus europaeus), and its decline in Great Britain since 1960, PhD Noble, D. (2012) The State of Britain’s Hedgehogs, BTO Research Report No. 598The State of Britain’s Hedgehogs (2011) by David Wembridge, PTES in the hedgehog (Erinaceus europaeus) population in Britain, where it is a native species.
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Original:  The project was established in 2011 in response to a detected decline Hof, A. (2009) A study of the current status of the hedgehog (Erinaceus europaeus), and its decline in Great Britain since 1960, PhD ThesisRoos, S., Johnston, A. Noble, D. (2012) The State of Britain’s Hedgehogs, BTO Research Report No. 598The State of Britain’s Hedgehogs (2011) by David Wembridge, PTES in the hedgehog (Erinaceus europaeus) population in Britain, where it is a native species.
Revised:  The project was established in 2011 in response to a detected decline Hof, A. (2009) A study of the current status of the hedgehog (Erinaceus europaeus), and its decline in Great Britain since 1960, PhD ThesisRoos, S., Johnston, A. Thesis in the hedgehog (Erinaceus europaeus) population in Britain, where it is a native species.
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Original: Alternately, there have been many attempts to move away from integrated accounts, and towards novel sustainability indices or statistics . Ecological footprint  accounts, developed by Mathis Wackernagel and William E. Rees, and since 200 , further developed by Global Footprint Network, compare human demand against what the planet or a region  can regenerate.
Revised: Alternately, there have been many attempts to move away from integrated accounts, and towards novel sustainability indices or statistics . Ecological footprint accounts, developed by Mathis Wackernagel and William E. Rees, and since 200 , further developed by Global Footprint Network, compare human demand against what the planet or a region 's ecosystems can regenerate.
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Original:  This is related to the proposal for nine planetary boundaries within which humans can safely operate,  by Rockström et al. , are projects which advocate for new approaches to global sustainability.
Revised:  This approach is congruent with the proposal for nine planetary boundaries within which humans can safely operate, by Rockström et al. , are projects which advocate for new approaches to global sustainability.
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Original: The environmental-economic accounts are developed in the National Accounts Division of Statistics South Africa ( SA).
Revised:  Statistics South Africa ( SA).
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Original:  The UK Natural Capital Committee is providing advice to help inform this project.
Revised:  The UK Natural Capital Committee was providing advice to help inform this project.
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Original:  The Natural Capital Committee is also developing a methodology for corporate natural capital accounting.
Revised:  The Natural Capital Committee was also developing a methodology for corporate natural capital accounting.
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Original:  It is undertaking a pilot project throughout 2014 with a range of organisations to test and refine this methodology and is encouraging organisations that own or manage land to develop corporate natural capital accounts.
Revised:  It was undertaking a pilot project throughout 2014 with a range of organisations to test and refine this methodology and is encouraging organisations that own or manage land to develop corporate natural capital accounts.
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Original:  1866 - St. Edward's Primary School founed . 1867 - Government Wharf built.
Revised:  1866 - St. Edward's Primary School founded . 1867 - Government Wharf built.
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Original: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when mutinous Nigerian soldiers led by  Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
Revised: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when some revolutionaries Nigerian soldiers led by Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
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Original: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when mutinous Nigerian soldiers led by  Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
Revised: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when mutinous Nigerian soldiers led by MJ Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
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Original:  Consequently, the retaliatory events by Northern members of the Nigerian Army that led to deaths of many innocent Igbo soldiers and civilians caused the Nigerian Civil War  .
Revised:  Consequently, the reprisal events by Northern members of the Nigerian Army that led to deaths of many innocent Igbo soldiers and civilians caused the Nigerian Civil War .
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Original: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when mutinous Nigerian soldiers led by  Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
Revised: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when revolutionary Nigerian soldiers led by Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
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Original: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when revolutionary Nigerian soldiers led by Major Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
Revised: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when mutinous Nigerian soldiers led by Major Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
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Original: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when revolutionary Nigerian soldiers led by Major Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
Revised: The 1966 Nigerian coup d'état began on 15 January 1966, when revolutionary Nigerian soldiers led by Chukwuma Kaduna Nzeogwu and Emmanuel Ifeajuna killed 22 people including the Prime Minister of Nigeria, many senior politicians, many senior Army officers (including their wives), and sentinels on protective duty.
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Original:  On 17 January, Major General Ironsi established the Supreme Military Council in Lagos and effectively suspended the constitution.
Revised:  On 17 January, Major Ironsi established the Supreme Military Council in Lagos and effectively suspended the constitution.
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Original: In the morning of 15 January 1966, at a meeting with some local journalists in Kaduna seeking to find out what was going on, it was brought to Major General Nzeogwu's attention that the only information about the events then was what was being broadcast by the BBC.
Revised: In the morning of 15 January 1966, at a meeting with some local journalists in Kaduna seeking to find out what was going on, it was brought to Major Nzeogwu's attention that the only information about the events then was what was being broadcast by the BBC.
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Original:  On 17 January, Major  Ironsi established the Supreme Military Council in Lagos and effectively suspended the constitution.
Revised:  On 17 January, Major General Ironsi established the Supreme Military Council in Lagos and effectively suspended the constitution.
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Original: History MPE started as analysis of risk factors ( such as smoking) and molecular pathologic findings (such as KRAS oncogene mutation in lung cancer ).
Revised: History MPE began as analysis of risk factors ( such as smoking) and molecular pathologic findings (such as KRAS oncogene mutation in lung cancer ).
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Original: History MPE started as analysis of risk factors ( such as smoking) and molecular pathologic findings (such as KRAS oncogene mutation in lung cancer ).
Revised: History MPE started as analysis of risk factors ( e.g., smoking) and molecular pathologic findings (such as KRAS oncogene mutation in lung cancer ).
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Original:  Studies to examine the relationship between an exposure and molecular pathologic signature of disease (particularly, cancer) became increasingly common throughout the 1990s and early 2000s.
Revised:  Studies to examine the relationship between an exposure and molecular pathological signatures of disease (particularly, cancer) became increasingly common throughout the 1990s and early 2000s.
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Original:  The use of molecular pathology in epidemiology posed lacked standardized methodologies and guidelines as well as interdisciplinary experts and training programs.
Revised:  The use of molecular pathology in epidemiology lacked standardized methodologies and guidelines as well as interdisciplinary experts and training programs.
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Original:  The MPE paradigm is in widespread use globally, and has been a subject in international conferences.
Revised:  The MPE paradigm is in widespread use globally, and has been a subject of international conferences.
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Original:  The International Molecular Pathological Epidemiology (MPE) Meeting Series has been open to  research community around the world, its second and third meetings were held in Boston, in December 2014 and May 2016, respectively
Revised:  The International Molecular Pathological Epidemiology (MPE) Meeting Series has been open to the research community around the world, its second and third meetings were held in Boston, in December 2014 and May 2016, respectively
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Original:  however, later his informant Cypher is willing to betray his colleagues because he would prefer to be reinserted into an ( arguably less perfect) Matrix as a wealthy and successful man than continue to live in the harsh realities outside the simulation.
Revised:  however, later his informant Cypher is willing to betray his colleagues because he would prefer to be reinserted into an ( admittedly less perfect) Matrix as a wealthy and successful man than continue to live in the harsh realities outside the simulation.
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Original:  It is one of the best known attempts to refute ethical hedonism, and attempts to do so by imagining a choice between everyday reality and an apparently preferable simulated reality.
Revised:  It is an attempt to refute ethical hedonism, and attempts to do so by imagining a choice between everyday reality and an apparently preferable simulated reality.
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Original:  It is an attempt to refute ethical hedonism , and attempts to do so by imagining a choice between everyday reality and an apparently preferable simulated reality.
Revised:  It is an attempt to refute ethical hedonism by imagining a choice between everyday reality and an apparently preferable simulated reality.
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Original:  C1: If all that matters to us is that we experience as much pleasure as we can  then we have no reason not to plug into the experience machine.
Revised:  C1: If all that matters to us is that we experience as much pleasure as we can , then we have no reason not to plug into the experience machine.
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Original:  for example in the short story "The Chamber of Life" by Green Peyton Wertenbaker (fr) , published in the magazine Amazing Stories in October 1929.
Revised:  for example in the short story "The Chamber of Life" by , published in the magazine Amazing Stories in October 1929.
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Original: Early life Kanailal was born in a Bengali Hindu family in Khilda village of the erstwhile Mymensingh district to Dwijendralal and Shantikana Niyogi in 1924.
Revised: Early life Kanailal was born in a Bengali Hindu family in Khilda village of the erstwhile Mymensingh district to Dwijendralal and Monorama Niyogi in 1924.
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Original:  He left behind his wife, two sons and two daughters and his 70 year old mother  
Revised:  He left behind his wife, two sons and two daughters and his 70 year old mother . 
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Original:  He left behind his wife, two sons and two daughters and his 70 year old mother.
Revised:  He left behind his wife, two sons and two daughters and his 70-year-old mother.
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Original: File:Common clownfish curves dnsmpl.jpg|upright=1.5|In a cleaning symbiosis , the clownfish feeds on small invertebrates  that otherwise have potential to harm the sea anemone, and the fecal matter from the clownfish provides nutrients to the sea anemone.
Revised: File:Common clownfish curves dnsmpl.jpg|upright=1.5|In a cleaning symbiosis the clownfish feeds on small invertebrates that otherwise have potential to harm the sea anemone, and the fecal matter from the clownfish provides nutrients to the sea anemone.
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Original: File:Common clownfish curves dnsmpl.jpg|upright=1.5|In a cleaning symbiosis , the clownfish feeds on small invertebrates  that otherwise have potential to harm the sea anemone, and the fecal matter from the clownfish provides nutrients to the sea anemone.
Revised: File:Common clownfish curves dnsmpl.jpg|upright=1.5|In a cleaning symbiosis , the clownfish feeds on small invertebrates , that otherwise have potential to harm the sea anemone, and the fecal matter from the clownfish provides nutrients to the sea anemone.
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Original:  The clownfish emits a high pitched sound that deters butterfly fish, which would otherwise eat the anemone , making the relationship mutualistic.]]
Revised:  The clownfish emits a high pitched sound that deters butterfly fish, which would otherwise eat the anemone . The relationship is therefore classified as mutualistic.]]
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Original: File:Common clownfish curves dnsmpl.jpg| upright=1.5|In a cleaning symbiosis the clownfish feeds on small invertebrates, that otherwise have potential to harm the sea anemone, and the fecal matter from the clownfish provides nutrients to the sea anemone.
Revised: File:Common clownfish curves dnsmpl.jpg| thuIn a cleaning symbiosis the clownfish feeds on small invertebrates, that otherwise have potential to harm the sea anemone, and the fecal matter from the clownfish provides nutrients to the sea anemone.
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Original:  On   19 September F4F-4s of VMF-441 landed on the strip and continued to use the runway during the remainder of the construction period.
Revised:  On On 19 September F4F-4s of VMF-441 landed on the strip and continued to use the runway during the remainder of the construction period.
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Original: United States Army Air Forces (USAAF) units based at Nanumea included: 30th Bombardment Group headquarters from 11 November 1943 -
Revised: United States Army Air Forces (USAAF) units based at Nanumea included: 30th Bombardment Group headquarters from 11 November 1943 –
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Original:  4 January 1944 27th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 10 November 1943 - 26 February 1944 28th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 12 November 1943 - 13 March 1944 45th Fighter Squadron operating P-40Ns from 28 November 1943 - 4 January 1944 United States Marine Corps (USMC) units based at Nanumea included: Marine Fighting Squadron 441 (VMF-441), flying the F4F Wildcat, operated from Nanumea from 28 September - December 1943.
Revised:  4 January 1944 27th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 10 November 1943 – 26 February 1944 28th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 12 November 1943 - 13 March 1944 45th Fighter Squadron operating P-40Ns from 28 November 1943 - 4 January 1944 United States Marine Corps (USMC) units based at Nanumea included: Marine Fighting Squadron 441 (VMF-441), flying the F4F Wildcat, operated from Nanumea from 28 September - December 1943.
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Original:  4 January 1944 27th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 10 November 1943 - 26 February 1944 28th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 12 November 1943 - 13 March 1944 45th Fighter Squadron operating P-40Ns from 28 November 1943 - 4 January 1944 United States Marine Corps (USMC) units based at Nanumea included: Marine Fighting Squadron 441 (VMF-441), flying the F4F Wildcat, operated from Nanumea from 28 September - December 1943.
Revised:  4 January 1944 27th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 10 November 1943 - 26 February 1944 28th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 12 November 1943 – 13 March 1944 45th Fighter Squadron operating P-40Ns from 28 November 1943 - 4 January 1944 United States Marine Corps (USMC) units based at Nanumea included: Marine Fighting Squadron 441 (VMF-441), flying the F4F Wildcat, operated from Nanumea from 28 September - December 1943.
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Original:  4 January 1944 27th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 10 November 1943 - 26 February 1944 28th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 12 November 1943 - 13 March 1944 45th Fighter Squadron operating P-40Ns from 28 November 1943 - 4 January 1944 United States Marine Corps (USMC) units based at Nanumea included: Marine Fighting Squadron 441 (VMF-441), flying the F4F Wildcat, operated from Nanumea from 28 September - December 1943.
Revised:  4 January 1944 27th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 10 November 1943 - 26 February 1944 28th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 12 November 1943 - 13 March 1944 45th Fighter Squadron operating P-40Ns from 28 November 1943 – 4 January 1944 United States Marine Corps (USMC) units based at Nanumea included: Marine Fighting Squadron 441 (VMF-441), flying the F4F Wildcat, operated from Nanumea from 28 September - December 1943.
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Original:  4 January 1944 27th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 10 November 1943 - 26 February 1944 28th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 12 November 1943 - 13 March 1944 45th Fighter Squadron operating P-40Ns from 28 November 1943 - 4 January 1944 United States Marine Corps (USMC) units based at Nanumea included: Marine Fighting Squadron 441 (VMF-441), flying the F4F Wildcat, operated from Nanumea from 28 September - December 1943.
Revised:  4 January 1944 27th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 10 November 1943 - 26 February 1944 28th Bombardment Squadron operating B-24s from 12 November 1943 - 13 March 1944 45th Fighter Squadron operating P-40Ns from 28 November 1943 - 4 January 1944 United States Marine Corps (USMC) units based at Nanumea included: Marine Fighting Squadron 441 (VMF-441), flying the F4F Wildcat, operated from Nanumea from 28 September – December 1943.
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Original:  In shallow water, waves may generate pore pressure build-up in the soil, which may lead to flow slide, and repeated impact on a platform may cause liquefaction  and loss of support.
Revised:  In shallow water, waves may generate pore pressure build-up in the soil, which may lead to flow slide, and repeated impact on a platform may cause liquefaction , and loss of support.
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