wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The Vancouver Coastal Health Authority warned residents , healthcare and all facilities serving the public to boil all water drinking water until further notice.
Revised:  The Vancouver Coastal Health Authority issued a warning to residents advising them to boil all water drinking water until further notice.
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Original:   Chief Medical Health Officer Dr. Patricia Daly, said severe landslides from the rain had caused high sediment levels in the areas reservoirs, causing "  an increased risk of gastrointestinal illness.
Revised:  The region's Chief Medical Health Officer Dr. Patricia Daly, said severe landslides from the rain had caused high sediment levels in the areas reservoirs, causing " an increased risk of gastrointestinal illness.
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Original:  Commercial enterprises were also affected , and food stores were ordered to cease using water to cool vegetables . Restaurants and coffee shops were also quieted .
Revised:  Commercial operations were affected as well. Food stores were ordered to cease using water to cool vegetables . Restaurants and coffee shops were also quieted .
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Original:  Commercial enterprises were also affected , and food stores were ordered to cease using water to cool vegetables . Restaurants and coffee shops were also quieted .
Revised:  Commercial enterprises were also affected , and food stores were ordered to cease using water to cool vegetables . Restaurants and coffee shops were quiet .
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Original:  According to BC Hydro the province's primary electrical provider, over 220,000 customers lost electricity.
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Original:  The record, however, was set in 1983 when 350.8mm rainfall was recorded at Vancouver International Airport in November .
Revised:  The record, however, was set in 1983 , according to measurements taken at Vancouver International Airport in November .
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Original:  He was 77. "This is a tremendous shock and an irreplaceable loss," University of Michigan president Mary Sue Coleman said at a news conference at Providence Hospital in Southfield, where the coach died.
Revised:  He was "This is a tremendous shock and an irreplaceable loss," University of Michigan president Mary Sue Coleman said at a news conference at Providence Hospital in Southfield, where the coach died.
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Original:  He was 77. "This is a tremendous shock and an irreplaceable loss," University of Michigan president Mary Sue Coleman said at a news conference at Providence Hospital in Southfield, where the coach died.
Revised:  He was 77. 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Schembechler collapsed at the studios of WXYZ-TV in the Detroit suburb and was taken by ambulance to the hospital .
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% taken by ambulance to the hospital .
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Original:   The electrical part of the heart was working fine but the mechanical part was not working," said Dr. Shukri David, the head of cardiology at Providence Hospital.
Revised:  " The electrical part of the heart was working fine but the mechanical part was not working," said Dr. Shukri David, the head of cardiology at Providence Hospital.
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Original: Syria has begun to witdraw its troops from northern and southern Lebanon, despite a large rally in Beirut to support the Syrian 's presence.
Revised: Syria has begun to witdraw its troops from northern and southern Lebanon, despite a large rally in Beirut to support the Syrian presence.
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Original:  Lebanese Defence minister Abdul-Rahim Murad said troops would pull back to the eastern Bekaa valley on Tuesday, but not give a date for a full withdrawal.
Revised:  Lebanese Defence Minister Abdul-Rahim Murad said troops would pull back to the eastern Bekaa valley on Tuesday, but not give a date for a full withdrawal.
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Original:  Lebanese Defence minister Abdul-Rahim Murad said troops would pull back to the eastern Bekaa valley on Tuesday, but not give a date for a full withdrawal.
Revised:  Lebanese Defence minister Abdul-Rahim Murad said troops would pull back to the eastern Bekaa Valley on Tuesday, but not give a date for a full withdrawal.
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Original:  Lebanese Defence minister Abdul-Rahim Murad said troops would pull back to the eastern Bekaa valley on Tuesday, but not give a date for a full withdrawal.
Revised:  Lebanese Defence minister Abdul-Rahim Murad said troops would pull back to the eastern Bekaa valley on Tuesday, but refused to give a date for a full withdrawal.
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Original:  U.S. President George W. Bush said in a speech today that "Freedom will prevail in Lebanon.
Revised:  U.S. President George W. Bush said in a speech today , "Freedom will prevail in Lebanon.
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Original:  Syria has been present in Lebanon since it began peace-keeping there in 1976 during a  civil war. U.S. forces withdrew in 1984 after a suicide attack killed 241 Marines.
Revised:  Syria has been present in Lebanon since the country began a civil war. U.S. forces withdrew in 1984 after a suicide attack killed 241 Marines.
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Original:  United Nations resolution 1559 requires the immeadiate and complete withdrawal of all Syrian forces from Lebanon.
Revised:  United Nations Resolution 1559 requires the immeadiate and complete withdrawal of all Syrian forces from Lebanon.
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Original:  United Nations resolution 1559 requires the immeadiate and complete withdrawal of all Syrian forces from Lebanon.
Revised:  United Nations resolution 1559 requires the immediate and complete withdrawal of all Syrian forces from Lebanon.
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Original: Syria has begun to witdraw its troops from northern and southern Lebanon , despite a large rally in Beirut to support the Syrian presence.
Revised: Syria has begun to witdraw its troops from northern and southern Lebanon despite a large rally in Beirut to support the Syrian presence.
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Original:   Syrian troops and intelligence officers have been present in Lebanon since the country began a peace-keeping mission in Lebanon during the 1976  start of Lebanon's civil war. U.S. forces withdrew in 1984 after a suicide attack killed 241 Marines.
Revised:  Syrian troops and intelligence officers have been present in Lebanon since the country began a peace-keeping mission in Lebanon during the 1976 , following the start of Lebanon's civil war. U.S. forces withdrew in 1984 after a suicide attack killed 241 Marines.
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Original: The  Government is planning to legislate to ensure that cantonments, churches and cemeteries built by the British during the Raj are preserved as heritage structures.
Revised: The Government is planning to introduce legislation to ensure that cantonments, churches and cemeteries built by the British during the Raj are preserved as heritage structures.
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Original:  There are 62 cantonments and 650 military stations in the country, some of which are already being in disrepair.
Revised:  There are 62 cantonments and 650 military stations in the country, some of which are in disrepair.
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Original:  "It is significant because it will not only protect heritage in the cantonments but also areas around it . And that means that the cantonment will show the way forward , " said Conservation Architect Ratish Nanda .
Revised:  "It is significant because it will not only protect heritage in the cantonments but also areas around it . And that means that the cantonment will show the way forward , " .
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Original: Best current affairs report finalist were Alex Teka on 60 minutes , Detox Diary on 20/20 , Not Fit to Practise  Turning the Tide on Sunday .
Revised: Best current affairs report finalist were Alex Teka , Detox Diary on 20/20 , Not Fit to Practise Turning the Tide on Sunday .
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Original: Best current affairs report finalist were Alex Teka on 60 minutes , Detox Diary on 20/20 , Not Fit to Practise  Turning the Tide on Sunday .
Revised: Best current affairs report finalist were Alex Teka on 60 minutes , Detox Diary , Not Fit to Practise Turning the Tide on Sunday .
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Original: Best current affairs report finalist were Alex Teka on 60 minutes , Detox Diary on 20/20 , Not Fit to Practise  Turning the Tide on Sunday .
Revised: Best current affairs report finalist were Alex Teka on 60 minutes , Detox Diary on 20/20 , Not Fit to Practise and Turning the Tide on Sunday .
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Original: Best current affairs report finalist were Alex Teka on 60 minutes , Detox Diary on 20/20 , Not Fit to Practise  Turning the Tide on Sunday .
Revised: Best current affairs report finalist were Alex Teka on 60 minutes , Detox Diary on 20/20 , Not Fit to Practise Turning the Tide .
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Original: The 2006 QANTAS New Zealand Television Awards were announced tonight NZDT .
Revised: The 2006 QANTAS New Zealand Television Awards were announced tonight (NZDT) .
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Original:  Best comedy finalists were pulp sport, Bro'Town or The Unauthorised History of New Zealand with Pulp Sport taking out the prize.
Revised:  Best comedy finalists were pulp sport, bro'Town and The Unauthorised History of New Zealand with Pulp Sport taking out the prize.
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Original:  Winner was Campbell Live,  Mr Campbell said:  Bloody Stoked."
Revised:  Winner was Campbell Live, Mr Campbell said: " Bloody Stoked."
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Original:  Fred Renata, best camera non factual .
Revised:  Fred Renata, best camera non factual 
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Original:  Best editing for non-factual went to Bryan Shaw.
Revised:  , and best editing for non-factual went to Bryan Shaw.
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Original:  Winner was John Campbell, the prize was awarded to him by his producer, Carol Hirshfield .
Revised:  Winner was John Campbell, the prize was awarded to him by his producer, Carol Hirschfield .
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Original:  Over 400 Palestinians, including many civilians, have been killed by attacks since June, which Israel says are aimed at Palestinian fighters.
Revised:  Over 400 Palestinians, tragically, some civilian.
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Original:  This is the first French presidential campaign where the party candidates are selected by a ballot of the mass membership  
Revised:  This is the first French presidential campaign where the party candidates are selected by a ballot of the mass membership . 
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Original:  She was elected yesterday by over 100,000 activists after a moderate Blairite campaign.
Revised:  She was elected yesterday by over 100,000 activists after a moderate , and some say Blairite, campaign.
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Original: 150px|Royal could be France's first female president Image:Hollande francois.png|150px|François Hollande—partner and party leader]] Royal is now a leading candidate to succeed Jacques Chirac in May 2007.
Revised:  Image:Hollande francois.png|150px|François Hollande—partner and party leader]] Royal is now a leading candidate to succeed Jacques Chirac in May 2007.
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Original:  Brad also said that he would have never even chosen bodyguards who weren't tolerant towards other religions.
Revised:  Pitt also said that he would have never even chosen bodyguards who weren't tolerant towards other religions.
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Original:  Speaking in Khartoum today, Jan Egeland, Under-Secretary-General for Humanitarian Affairs and Emergency Relief Coordinator of the United Nations, said “this is the moment of truth.
Revised: frame| Speaking in Khartoum today, Jan Egeland, Under-Secretary-General for Humanitarian Affairs and Emergency Relief Coordinator of the United Nations, said “this is the moment of truth.
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Original:  Kofi Annan, retiring UN Secretary General, had announced agreement of African, Arab and European leaders to provide a 20,000 force to supplement the 7,000 African Union peacekeepers trying to cope with the situation that had resulted in 240,000 being killed and 2.5 million being displaced during three years of conflict in the western region.
Revised:  Kofi Annan, retiring UN Secretary General, yesterday announced agreement of African, Arab and European leaders to provide a 20,000 force to supplement the 7,000 African Union peacekeepers trying to cope with the situation that had resulted in 240,000 being killed and 2.5 million being displaced during three years of conflict in the western region.
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Original:  The Sudan government has denied that it supports the Janjaweed   
Revised:  The Sudan government has denied that it supports the Janjaweed . 
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Original:  Sudan continues to deny supporting the mercenaries . Sudan continues to deny support of the mercenaries
Revised:  Sudan continues to deny supporting the mercenaries 
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Original: Wednesday at a physics conference in San Fransisco a group of researchers proposed a new way to transfer power wirelessly.
Revised: Wednesday at a physics conference in San Francisco, a group of researchers proposed a new way to transfer power wirelessly.
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Original:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. this phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and ' evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and ipods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet  and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
Revised:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. This phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and ' evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and ipods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
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Original:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. this phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and ' evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and ipods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet  and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
Revised:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. this phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and ipods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
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Original:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. this phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and ' evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and ipods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet  and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
Revised:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. this phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and ' evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and iPods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. this phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and ' evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and ipods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet  and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
Revised:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. this phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and ' evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and ipods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet , and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
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Original:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. this phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and ' evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and ipods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet  and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
Revised:  in which energy jumps between two locations, just as it does inside an electric motor or transformer. this phenominon is called tunneling in quantum mechanics, and ' evanescent coupling in electromagnetics. this technology would enable wireless gadgets such as cell phones and ipods never having to be plugged into a wall outlet and other technology such as micro robots inside a person to recharge remotely. Eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly
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Original:  Eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly through power sources near teh roadway
Revised:  Eventually it might enable electric transportation such as buses to recharge wirelessly through power sources near the roadway
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Original:  Marin Soljacic and his MIT colleagues ' idea involves a source that creates a short range oscillating field.
Revised:  Marin Soljacic and his MIT colleagues revived an idea which involves a source that creates a short range oscillating field.
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Original:  An ash warning until 9:00 pm has been announced for nearby communities .
Revised:  An ash warning until 9:00 pm has been announced for communities around the mountain .
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Original:  The eruption was visible from the city of Portland in the neighbouring state of Oregon, causing traffic slowdowns as commuters slowed to watch the spectacle.
Revised:  The eruption was visible from Portland metropolitan area in the neighbouring state of Oregon, causing traffic slowdowns as commuters slowed to watch the spectacle.
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Original:  The volcano has been building a new dome in its crater in recent months , and causing tremors.
Revised:  The volcano has been building a new dome in its crater in recent months and causing tremors.
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Original:  The eruption was visible from  Portland metropolitan area in the neighbouring state of Oregon, causing traffic slowdowns as commuters slowed to watch the spectacle.
Revised:  The eruption was visible from the Portland metropolitan area in the neighbouring state of Oregon, causing traffic slowdowns as commuters slowed to watch the spectacle.
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Original:  The volcano has been building a new dome in its crater in recent months and causing tremors . A Wikinews correspondent in Portland reports that the event was visible from the city .
Revised:  The volcano has been building a new dome in its crater in recent months and causing tremors .
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Original:  With this milestone reached the Chinese Wikipedia becomes the 12th largest Wikipedia currently developed, and the second largest Asian language Wikipedia just after its Japanese brother .
Revised:  With this milestone reached the Chinese Wikipedia becomes the 12th largest Wikipedia currently developed, and the second largest Asian language Wikipedia just after its Japanese counterpart .
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Original: The aim of the various Wikipedia sites is to provide a high-quality information source in as many languages as possible . Chinese-language Wikipedia presents different view of history%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1. November 29th, 2006, International Herald Tribune Asia-Pacific's article:
Revised: The aim of the various Wikipedia sites is to provide a high-quality information source in as many languages as possible Chinese-language Wikipedia presents different view of history%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1. November 29th, 2006, International Herald Tribune Asia-Pacific's article:
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Original: The aim of the various Wikipedia sites is to provide a high-quality information source in as many languages as possible . Chinese-language Wikipedia presents different view of history%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1. November 29th, 2006, International Herald Tribune Asia-Pacific's article:
Revised: The aim of the various Wikipedia sites is to provide a high-quality information source in as many languages as possible . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1. November 29th, 2006, International Herald Tribune Asia-Pacific's article:
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Original:  Chinese-language Wikipedia presents different view of history :"on sensitive questions of China's modern history or on hot-button issues, the Chinese version diverges so dramatically from its English counterpart that it sometimes reads as if it were approved by the censors themselves." 2. November 30th, 2006, CBS published an online article named: Is Wikipedia China Really Wikipedia?
Revised:  Chinese-language Wikipedia presents different view of history :"on sensitive questions of China's modern history or on hot-button issues, the Chinese version diverges so dramatically from its English counterpart that it sometimes reads as if it were approved by the censors themselves." 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3. On December 1, 2006, The New York Times published another report by Howard W. French, titled as "Wikipedia lays bare two versions of China's past." "Some say the object should be to spread reliable information as widely as possible, and that, in any case, self-censorship is pointless because the government still frequently blocks access to Wikipedia for most Chinese Internet users.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Some say the object should be to spread reliable information as widely as possible, and that, in any case, self-censorship is pointless because the government still frequently blocks access to Wikipedia for most Chinese Internet users.
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Original:  'To the local Wikipedians, the first objective is to make it well known among Chinese, to get people to understand the principles of Wikipedia step by step, and not to get the thing blocked by the government."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% And "the articles are already pre-censored by party-leaning (Chinese wikipedia) moderators and users.
Revised:  'To the local Wikipedians, the first objective is to make it well known among Chinese, to get people to understand the principles of Wikipedia step by step, and not to get the thing blocked by the government."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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