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Original:  They also could "hardly wait to get home" in order to spend time with their families.
Revised:  They also could "hardly wait to get home" to spend time with their families.
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Original:  Al-Gilani indicated that the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day before returning to Ireland and Uganda respectively . John O'Shea, president of GOAL  told AFP by telephone that  "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
Revised:  Al-Gilani indicated the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day before returning to Ireland and Uganda respectively . John O'Shea, president of GOAL told AFP by telephone that "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
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Original:  Al-Gilani indicated that the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day before returning to Ireland and Uganda respectively . John O'Shea, president of GOAL  told AFP by telephone that  "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
Revised:  Al-Gilani indicated that the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day prior to them respectively returning to Ireland and Uganda respectively . John O'Shea, president of GOAL told AFP by telephone that "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
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Original:  Al-Gilani indicated that the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day before returning to Ireland and Uganda respectively . John O'Shea, president of GOAL  told AFP by telephone that  "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
Revised:  Al-Gilani indicated that the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day before returning to Ireland and Uganda . John O'Shea, president of GOAL told AFP by telephone that "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
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Original:  Al-Gilani indicated that the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day before returning to Ireland and Uganda respectively . John O'Shea, president of GOAL  told AFP by telephone that  "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
Revised:  Al-Gilani indicated that the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day before returning to Ireland and Uganda respectively . John O'Shea, president of GOAL , told AFP by telephone that "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
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Original:  Al-Gilani indicated that the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day before returning to Ireland and Uganda respectively . John O'Shea, president of GOAL  told AFP by telephone that  "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
Revised:  Al-Gilani indicated that the pair were in Kutum and due to fly to Khartoum later the same day before returning to Ireland and Uganda respectively . John O'Shea, president of GOAL told AFP by telephone that , "[w]e are all relieved," and that all at the charity were particularly happy for their families.
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Original: Countering claims earlier in the year that the kidnappers had demanded $2m for the freedom of the two aid workers , al-Gilani stressed that "no ransom was paid,".
Revised: Countering claims earlier in the year that the kidnappers had demanded $2m for the freedom of the two aid workers , al-Gilani stressed "no ransom was paid,".
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Original:  He added that it was local tribal chiefs who had pressured the kidnappers into freeing them .
Revised:  adding that local tribal chiefs who had pressured the kidnappers into freeing them .
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Original:  He added that it was local tribal chiefs who had pressured the kidnappers into freeing them .
Revised:  He added that it was local tribal chiefs pressured the kidnappers into freeing them .
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Original:  He added that it was local tribal chiefs who had pressured the kidnappers into freeing them .
Revised:  He added that it was local tribal chiefs who had pressured the kidnappers into freeing the aid workers .
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Original: The captors held the two aid workers for over 100 days, the longest in Darfur since the  start of the conflict in the regionearly 2003.
Revised: The captors held the two aid workers for over 100 days, the longest in Darfur since the start of the region's conflict.
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Original:  Until March, the longest an aid worker had been held in Darfur was 24 hours.
Revised:  Until March, the longest an aid worker had been detained in Darfur was 24 hours.
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Original:  Since the issue of an arrest warrant in March by the International Criminal Court for Sudan's President Omar al-Bashir for mastermining war crimes, aid workers have said that hostility and threats have increased towards them, and that Sudan's relations with foreign relief organisations have declined dramatically.
Revised:  Following the issue of an arrest warrant in March by the International Criminal Court for Sudan's President Omar al-Bashir for mastermining war crimes, aid workers have said that hostility and threats have increased towards them, and that Sudan's relations with foreign relief organisations have declined dramatically.
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Original:  Since the issue of an arrest warrant in March by the International Criminal Court for Sudan's President Omar al-Bashir for mastermining war crimes, aid workers have said that hostility and threats have increased towards them, and that Sudan's relations with foreign relief organisations have declined dramatically.
Revised:  Since the issue of an arrest warrant in March by the International Criminal Court for Sudan's President Omar al-Bashir for masterminding war crimes, aid workers have said that hostility and threats have increased towards them, and that Sudan's relations with foreign relief organisations have declined dramatically.
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Original:  Since the issue of an arrest warrant in March by the International Criminal Court for Sudan's President Omar al-Bashir for mastermining war crimes, aid workers have said that hostility and threats have increased towards them, and that Sudan's relations with foreign relief organisations have declined dramatically.
Revised:  Since the issue of an arrest warrant in March by the International Criminal Court for Sudan's President Omar al-Bashir for mastermining war crimes, aid workers say hostility and threats have increased towards them, and that Sudan's relations with foreign relief organisations have declined dramatically.
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Original:  In March and April two civil workers of Médecins Sans Frontières (Doctors Without Borders) and French aid agency Aide médicale internationale (International Medical Aid) were kidnapped then released after three days and 26 days respectively.
Revised:  In March and April two civil workers of Médecins Sans Frontières (Doctors Without Borders) and French aid agency Aide médicale internationale (International Medical Aid) were kidnapped then released after three and 26 days respectively.
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Original:  A different group is still holding captive two employees of the  joint United Nations and African Union peacekeeping force in Darfur.
Revised:  A different group still holds captive two employees of the joint United Nations and African Union peacekeeping force in Darfur.
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Original:  A different group is still holding captive two employees of the  joint United Nations and African Union peacekeeping force in Darfur.
Revised:  A different group is still holding captive two employees of the joint United Nations — African Union peacekeeping force in Darfur.
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Original: Until now the Sudanese authorities has not punished kidnappers .
Revised: To date, Sudanese authorities have not punished kidnappers .
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Original:  He told AFPthat " They  must be punished otherwise there will be no more order" in Darfur .
Revised:  In talking with AFP, he stated, " They must be punished otherwise there will be no more order" in Darfur .
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Original:  He told AFPthat " They  must be punished otherwise there will be no more order" in Darfur .
Revised:  He told AFPthat " t must be punished otherwise there will be no more order" in Darfur .
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Original:  He told AFPthat " They  must be punished otherwise there will be no more order" in Darfur .
Revised:  He told AFPthat " They hey must be punished otherwise there will be no more order" in Darfur .
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Original:  He told AFPthat " They  must be punished otherwise there will be no more order" in Darfur .
Revised:  He told AFPthat " They must be punished otherwise there will be no more order" .
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Original:  The government called the kidnappers "bandits" and that no amnesty would be granted for the release of the aid workers
Revised:  The government called the kidnappers "bandits" and state no amnesty will be granted for the release of the aid workers
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Original:  The government called the kidnappers "bandits" and that no amnesty would be granted for the release of the aid workers
Revised:  The government called the kidnappers "bandits" and that no amnesty would be granted for the release of aid workers
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Original:  Its been over a decade since Houston last performed in the UK
Revised:  It has been over a decade since Houston last performed in the UK
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Original: After Houston 's performance, X Factor fans began to complain on the shows website  . Some accused Houston of being on drugs, because of her shaky voice after her performance while being interviewed by the show's host Dermot O'Leary.
Revised: After Houston 's performance, X Factor fans began to complain on the shows website . Some accused Houston of being on drugs, because of her shaky voice while being interviewed by the show's host Dermot O'Leary.
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Original: In Shanghai, China, bootleg copies of Microsoft’s Windows 7 operating system were displayed , a week before  official date of sale.
Revised: In Shanghai, China, bootleg copies of Microsoft’s Windows 7 operating system were displayed a week before official date of sale.
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Original: In Shanghai, China, bootleg copies of Microsoft’s Windows 7 operating system were displayed , a week before  official date of sale.
Revised: In Shanghai, China, bootleg copies of Microsoft’s Windows 7 operating system were displayed , a week before the official date of sale.
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Original:  In China, the world’s second-largest PC market, about 80 percent of software sold last year was pirated.
Revised:  In China, the world’s second largest PC market, about 80 percent of software sold last year was pirated.
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Original:  The biggest issue is  price of software: Microsoft will sell its low-end version of Windows 7 for 15 times as much as is charged for pirated copies.
Revised:  The biggest issue is the price of software: Microsoft will sell its low-end version of Windows 7 for 15 times as much as is charged for pirated copies.
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Original:  However, that caused thousands of irate users to migrate to free software from domestic companies like Kingsoft.
Revised:  However, that caused thousands of irate users to migrate to free software from domestic companies such as Kingsoft.
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Original:  Some people have said that free Web-based software, supported by advertising, may ultimately help to reduce piracy in China by letting third parties pay for development costs.
Revised:  Some people have said that free web-based software, supported by advertising, may ultimately help to reduce piracy in China by letting third parties pay for development costs.
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Original:  Another likely competitor of Windows  is Mac OS: its sales figures have consistently grown every time a new Windows operating system  launched over the last 10 years
Revised:  Another likely competitor of Windows is Mac OS: its sales figures have consistently grown every time a new Windows operating system has launched over the last 10 years
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Original:  However, that caused over Nine Thousand irate users to migrate to free software from domestic companies such as Kingsoft.
Revised:  However, that caused thousands of irate users to migrate to free software from domestic companies such as Kingsoft.
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Original:  Another likely competitor of Windows 7 is Mac OS: its sales figures have consistently grown every time a new Windows operating system has launched over the last 10 years . Microsoft earlier this week clarified that all versions of Windows, both legitimate and illegitimate, receive security updates –
Revised:  Another likely competitor of Windows 7 is Mac OS: its sales figures have consistently grown every time a new Windows operating system has launched over the last 10 years Microsoft earlier this week clarified that all versions of Windows, both legitimate and illegitimate, receive security updates –
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Original:  While it may be mildly entertaining to laugh at illegal installations of Windows fall at the hands of a computer worm, an epidemic is still an epidemic – especially if it affects legitimate users who simply haven’t applied the current patches or security software
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Original:  [[ ]]]]] In Shanghai, China, bootleg copies of Microsoft’s Windows 7 operating system were displayed a week before the official date of sale.
Revised:  [[ ffuvvvlkkk]]]]] In Shanghai, China, bootleg copies of Microsoft’s Windows 7 operating system were displayed a week before the official date of sale.
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Original:  In a bid to tackle the problem, Microsoft began an unconventional campaign in China last year that caused a black screen to be displayed every hour for users of pirated versions of Windows XP (Windows Genuine Advantage was distributed through automatic updates).
Revised:  In a bid to tackle the problem, Microsoft began an unconventional campaign in Genuine Advantage was distributed through automatic updates).
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Original:  People in mainland China have been able to buy copies of the newest version of Microsoft’s Windows franchise for 20 yuan ($2.93) each — less than one percent of list prices, which are $320. 200px|Screenshot of Windows 7 Ultimate In China, the world’s second largest PC market, about 80 percent of software sold last year was pirated.
Revised:  People in mainland China have been able to buy copies of the newest version of Microsoft’s Windows franchise for 20 yuan ($2.93) each — less than one percent of list prices, which are $320. In China, the world’s second largest PC market, about 80 percent of software sold last year was pirated.
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Original:  Owono says the new, smaller government will be more efficient and includes people determined to get everyone in Gabon working together for a better country.
Revised:  Owono said that the new, smaller government will be more efficient and includes people determined to get everyone in Gabon working together for a better country.
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Original:  Gabon's constitutional court recounted returns from more than 2,800 polling stations and confirmed Mr. Bongo's win.
Revised:  Gabon's constitutional court recounted returns from more than 2,800 polling stations and confirmed Bongo's win.
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Original:  Under his father, Gabon became he world's sixth-largest oil exporter, but 70\% of the population still live in poverty  
Revised:  Under his father, Gabon became he world's sixth-largest oil exporter, but 70\% of the population still live in poverty . 
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Original: The four countries met at the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) meeting today in Vienna, despite a statement on Iranian television shortly beforehand stating that the government would not deal directly with France, due to it previously failing to provide "nuclear materials".
Revised: The four countries met at the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) today in Vienna, despite a statement on Iranian television shortly beforehand stating that the government would not deal directly with France, due to it previously failing to provide "nuclear materials".
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Original: The four countries met at the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) meeting today in Vienna, despite a statement on Iranian television shortly beforehand stating that the government would not deal directly with France, due to it previously failing to provide "nuclear materials".
Revised: The four countries met at the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) meeting today in Vienna, despite a statement on Iranian television shortly beforehand saying that the government would not deal directly with France, due to it previously failing to provide "nuclear materials".
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Original:  This is the first time that a deal has been worked on regarding Iran's nuclear programme since the issue was brought up at a meeting in Geneva on October 1. Defiant stance A senior Iranian official denied reports on state broadcaster Press TV that Iran only wanted to import higher-enriched uranium for its research reactor directly from France, Russia or the US, currently difficult under current UN sanctions.
Revised:  This is the first time that a deal has been worked on regarding Iran's nuclear programme since the issue was brought up at a meeting in Geneva on October 1. Defiant stance A senior Iranian official denied reports on state broadcaster Press TV that Iran only wanted to import higher-enriched uranium for its research reactor directly from France, Russia or the US, due to difficulties under current UN sanctions.
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Original:  According to a Western Diplomat , who wished to remain anonymous, the talks this week were supposed to seal the deal.
Revised:  According to a Western diplomat , who wished to remain anonymous, the talks this week were supposed to seal the deal.
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Original: File:Elbaradei.png|150px|Mohamed ElBaradei Talks between Iranian, Russian, French, and United States officials are "off to a good start" according to Mohamed ElBaradei, head of the United Nations' nuclear watchdog.
Revised:  Talks between Iranian, Russian, French, and United States officials are "off to a good start" according to Mohamed ElBaradei, head of the United Nations' nuclear watchdog.
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Original: Stewart D. Nozette, 52, from Chevy Chase, Maryland  was arrested Monday on charges of espionage , and is being held until a court hearing on Tuesday.
Revised: Stewart D. Nozette, 52, from Chevy Chase, Maryland was arrested Monday on charges of espionage and is being held until a court hearing on Tuesday.
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Original: ]] Nozette received a PhD from the Massachusetts Institute of Technology, had several high profile jobs in the US government and access to classified materials.
Revised: ]] Nozette received a PhD from the Massachusetts Institute of Technology, had several high profile jobs in the U.S. government and access to classified materials.
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Original:  He later returned with  envelopes containing secret information about satellites, early warning systems, and the ability of the US to withstand a large-scale attack.
Revised:  He later returned with the envelopes containing secret information about satellites, early warning systems, and the ability of the US to withstand a large-scale attack.
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Original:  He later returned with  envelopes containing secret information about satellites, early warning systems, and the ability of the US to withstand a large-scale attack.
Revised:  He later returned with envelopes containing secret information about U.S. satellites, their early warning systems, and the ability of the US to withstand a large-scale attack.
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Original:  He later returned with  envelopes containing secret information about satellites, early warning systems, and the ability of the US to withstand a large-scale attack.
Revised:  He later returned with envelopes containing secret information about satellites, early warning systems, and the ability of the U.S. to withstand a large-scale attack.
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Original:  "The conduct alleged in this complaint is serious and should serve as a warning to anyone who would consider compromising our nation's secrets for profit," said US Assistant Attorney General David Kris
Revised:  "The conduct alleged in this complaint is serious and should serve as a warning to anyone who would consider compromising our nation's secrets for profit," said U.S. Assistant Attorney General David Kris
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Original:  Both of these organizations had contracts with the US government, providing advanced technology  .
Revised:  Both of these organizations had contracts with the U.S. government, providing advanced technology .
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Original: After a month, Nozette received two envelopes containing  11,000 USD and lists of questions they wanted Nozette to answer.
Revised: After a month, Nozette received two envelopes containing 11,000 and lists of questions they wanted Nozette to answer.
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Original:  He worked for the Energy Department's Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory from 1990 to 1999 and was was the President of the Alliance for Competitive Technology, which he founded in 1990.
Revised:  He worked for the Energy Department's Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory from 1990 to 1999 and was the President of the Alliance for Competitive Technology, which he founded in 1990.
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Original:  Nozette also worked for NASA and the Department of Defense. 
Revised:  Nozette also worked for NASA and the Department of Defense. During the course of these jobs, authorities say Nozette had access to classified information.
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Original: An undercover FBIagent, pretending to be an Israeli intelligence officer , confronted Nozette on September 3, 2009 and asked for government information.
Revised: An undercover FBIagent, pretending to be an Israeli intelligence officer contacted Nozette on September 3, 2009 and asked for government information.
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Original:  During another meeting with the officer, Nozette  pointed out that he no longer had access to classified documents but might recall information from them.
Revised:  During another meeting with the officer, Nozette allegedly pointed out that he no longer had access to classified documents but might recall information from them.
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Original:  After a month, Nozette received two envelopes containing US$11,000 and lists of questions they wanted Nozette to answer.
Revised:  The notes detail that Nozette received two envelopes containing US$11,000 and lists of questions they wanted Nozette to answer.
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Original:  Nozette , if convicted, faces  maximum sentence of life in prison.
Revised:  Nozette , if convicted, faces Nozette faces a maximum sentence of life in prison.
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Original: According to court notes made by the FBI , an undercover agent pretending to be an Israeli intelligence officer contacted Nozette on September 3, 2009 and asked for information, and later that day Nozette confirmed his willingness to give the officer classified material in exchange for money and an Israeli passport.
Revised: According to court notes made by the Federal Bureau of Investigation , an undercover agent pretending to be an Israeli intelligence officer contacted Nozette on September 3, 2009 and asked for information, and later that day Nozette confirmed his willingness to give the officer classified material in exchange for money and an Israeli passport.
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