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Original:  In his blog, on February 11, 2005, Jen appears positive about his future , writing "I've actually viewed this as a great learning experience.
Revised:  In his blog, on February 11, 2005, Jen appeared positive about his future , writing "I've actually viewed this as a great learning experience.
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Original:  In his blog, on February 11, 2005, Jen appears positive about his future , writing "I've actually viewed this as a great learning experience.
Revised:  In his blog, on February 11, 2005, Jen appears positive about his future . "I've actually viewed this as a great learning experience.
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Original:  Skimming occurs when either an ATM or merchant's terminal are used modified to record a copy of a customer's card.
Revised:  Skimming occurs when either an ATM or merchant's terminal are modified to record a copy of a customer's card.
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Original:  Hamas is reported to have concerns about the pace of peace talks, fearing that protracted negotiations may lead to little benefit for the Palestinians.
Revised:  The BBC is reporting that Hamas is concerned about the pace of peace talks, fearing that protracted negotiations may lead to little benefit for the Palestinians.
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Original:  Hamas is reported to have concerns about the pace of peace talks, fearing that protracted negotiations may lead to little benefit for the Palestinians.
Revised:  Hamas is reported to have concerns about the pace of peace talks, worrying that protracted negotiations may lead to little benefit for the Palestinians.
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Original: Hamas announced that it will continue its undeclared ceasefire while it considers whether to officially join a ceasefire with Israel declared this week by the Palestinian Authority and the Israeli Government at a conference in the Egyptian resort of Sharm el-Sheikh.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hamas (حماس), an acronym for Harakat al-Muqawamah al-Islamiyyah (Arabic: Islamic Resistance Movement, Hamas is also Arabic for 'zeal' or 'courage'), is a Palestinian Islamist paramilitary and political organization, regarded by some as a militant organization and by others as a terrorist group.
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Original:  The United States, Canada, Israel and the European Union, among others, consider Hamas a terrorist organization.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hamas is notorious for using the tactic of suicide bombing against Israel, particularly against civilians in busy city areas.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hamas - from Wikipedia Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflicts Category:War%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sv:Hamas i samtal om eldupph
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hamas - from Wikipedia Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflicts Category:War%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sv:Hamas i samtal om eldupph
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hamas - from Wikipedia Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflicts Category:War%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sv:Hamas i samtal om eldupph
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflicts Category:War%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sv:Hamas i samtal om eldupph
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hamas - from Wikipedia Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflicts Category:War%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sv:Hamas i samtal om eldupph
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hamas - from Wikipedia %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% sv:Hamas i samtal om eldupph
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Original: Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas held talks earlier in the day with Hamas leaders at an undisclosed location, with the aim of pursuading them to officially join the ceasefire.
Revised: Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas held talks earlier in the day with Hamas leaders at an undisclosed location, with the aim of persuading them to officially join the ceasefire.
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Original:  Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflicts Category:War  sv:Hamas i samtal om eldupphö
Revised:  Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflicts Category:War sv:Hamas i samtal om eldupph
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Original: A doctor, a doctor's helper and three women where condemned by the crime of abortion.
Revised: A doctor, his assistant and three client women where condemned by the crime of abortion.
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Original:  All the intervenients  - 17 in total - add already been free from charges in 2004, due to the lack of evidences.
Revised:  All the intervenients - 17 in total - had already been acquitted from charges in 2004, due to the lack of evidences.
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Original:  But this decision was declared void by a superior court , deciding by the legality of the medical exams performed , and so this new decision was known today.
Revised:  But this decision was declared void by a superior court that decided by the legality of the medical exams performed , and so this new decision was known today.
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Original:  But this decision was declared void by a superior court , deciding by the legality of the medical exams performed , and so this new decision was known today.
Revised:  But this decision was declared void by a superior court , deciding by the legality of the medical exams performed . The court process was restarted and the new decision was known today.
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Original:  The exams in question were made immediatly after the womem been arrested exiting from the medical clinic.
Revised:  The exams in question were performed immediatly after the womem been arrested exiting from the medical clinic.
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Original:  The exams in question were made immediatly after the womem been arrested exiting from the medical clinic.
Revised:  The exams in question were made immediatly after the women were arrested exiting from the medical clinic.
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Original:  The police just took the womem to the hospital and performed the exam
Revised:  The police just took the women to the hospital and performed the exam
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Original: A doctor, his assistant and three client women where condemned by the crime of abortion  . 12 of the defendantswere declared not guilty , mostly women and their partners  .
Revised: A doctor, his assistant and three client women where condemned by the crime of abortion . Twelve other defendants , mostly women and their partners .
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Original:  The doctor was condemned to 4 years and 8 months , with a 1 year pardon .
Revised:  The doctor was condemned to 4 years and 8 months in prison .
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Original:  His assistant was considered an accomplice and condemned to a sentence of 1 year and 4 months suspended for 3 years .
Revised:  His assistant was deemed an accomplice and condemned to a sentence of 1 year and 4 months suspended for 3 years .
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Original:  His assistant was considered an accomplice and condemned to a sentence of 1 year and 4 months suspended for 3 years .
Revised:  His assistant was considered an accomplice and sentenced to 1 year and 4 months suspended for 3 years .
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Original:  The three women were condemned to 6 months, suspended for 2 years . All the defendents - 17 in total - had already been acquitted from charges in 2004 , due to the lack of evidences.
Revised:  The three women were given 6 months, suspended for 2 years . All the defendents - 17 in total - had already been acquitted from charges in 2004 , due to the lack of evidences.
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Original:  The three women were condemned to 6 months, suspended for 2 years . All the defendents - 17 in total - had already been acquitted from charges in 2004 , due to the lack of evidences.
Revised:  The three women were condemned to 6 month suspended sentences . All the defendents - 17 in total - had already been acquitted from charges in 2004 , due to the lack of evidences.
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Original:  The three women were condemned to 6 months, suspended for 2 years . All the defendents - 17 in total - had already been acquitted from charges in 2004 , due to the lack of evidences.
Revised:  The three women were condemned to 6 months, suspended for 2 years . All the defendents had earlier been acquitted of the charges in 2004 , due to the lack of evidences.
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Original:  The three women were condemned to 6 months, suspended for 2 years . All the defendents - 17 in total - had already been acquitted from charges in 2004 , due to the lack of evidences.
Revised:  The three women were condemned to 6 months, suspended for 2 years . All the defendents - 17 in total - had already been acquitted from charges in 2004 for lack of evidences.
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Original:  But this decision was declared void by a superior court that decided by the legality of the medical exams performed .
Revised:  That decision was declared void by a superior court that decided by the legality of the medical exams performed .
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Original:  The court process was restarted and the new decision was known today.
Revised:  The court 
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Original:  The exams were done without a court decision and without presence of a state witness .
Revised:  The exams were done without a court order or the presence of a state witness .
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Original:  The airport main building has been closed, but flights are continuing to lan
Revised:  The airport main building has been closed, but flights are continuing to land
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Original: A bomb scare has caused an evacuation of Dublin Airport  .
Revised: A bomb scare caused an evacuation of Dublin Airport .
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Original:  The airport main building has been closed , but flights are continuing to land
Revised:  The airport main building has been closed , but flights were continuing to land
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Original: In a country  infamous for its censorship there’s been outcry from press freedom campaign groups, but the Chinese government insist that the laws are primarily to give local governments more control in releasing information to the public.
Revised: In a country which is infamous for its censorship there’s been outcry from press freedom campaign groups, but the Chinese government insist that the laws are primarily to give local governments more control in releasing information to the public.
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Original:  Chinese journalists on the mainland and Hong Kong have criticised the law, calling it a “step backward.”
Revised:  Chinese journalists on the mainland Hong Kong have criticised the law, calling it a “step backward.”
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Original:  In both those races , I'll Have Another passed Bodemeister in the final part of the race.
Revised:  Each time , I'll Have Another passed Bodemeister in the final part of the race.
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Original: This week an exorcist from the Roman Catholic Chruch stirred up long-standing rumors in Italy about a fifteen year old girl.
Revised: This week the Roman Catholic Chruch stirred up long-standing rumors in Italy about a fifteen year old girl.
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Original:  Investigators are currently looking into whether the girl's remains ended up in the coffin of a gangster.
Revised:  Investigators are currently looking into whether the girl's remains ended up alongside the coffin of a gangster.
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Original:  The Pakistan Telecommunication Authority had convinced Facebook to hide the posts from Pakistani visitors  but Twitter didn't respond to the request, and so the PTA blocked the site during negotiations Saturday.
Revised:  The Pakistan Telecommunication Authority had convinced Facebook to hide the posts from Pakistani visitors , but Twitter didn't respond to the request, and so the PTA blocked the site during negotiations Saturday.
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Original:  The block was lifted on Sunday  and Twitter said it did not remove any material.
Revised:  The block was lifted on Sunday , and Twitter said it did not remove any material.
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Original:  Early that week, Facebook founder Mark Zuckerberg turned 28 on the same day that  Priscella Chan graduated.
Revised:  Early that week, Facebook founder Mark Zuckerberg turned 28 on the same day that his girlfriend Priscella Chan graduated.
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Original:  The last horse to win all three  was Affirmed in nineteen seventy eight.
Revised:  The last horse to win all three races was Affirmed in nineteen seventy eight.
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Original: Raw Opals spend week preparing for London Games (3:52) Wikinews has been following a contender in this summer's competition for gold in women's basketball.
Revised:  Wikinews has been following a contender in this summer's competition for gold in women's basketball.
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Original: A Baghdad resident, Hussein al-Shimmari, said that the incident "shows the barbaric and aggressive nature of Americans."
Revised: One Baghdad resident, Hussein al-Shimmari, said that the incident "shows the barbaric and aggressive nature of Americans."
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Original:  Gen. George W. Casey Jr., commander of U.S. forces in Iraq and Zalmay Khalilzad, ambassador to Iraq, issued a joint apology Thursday in which they said, "We understand this is painful, confusing and disturbing,  not only to the family who lost a loved one, but to the Iraqi people as a whole.
Revised:  Gen. George W. Casey Jr., commander of U.S. forces in Iraq and Zalmay Khalilzad, ambassador to Iraq, issued a joint apology Thursday . "We understand this is painful, confusing and disturbing, not only to the family who lost a loved one, but to the Iraqi people as a whole.
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Original:  Gen. George W. Casey Jr., commander of U.S. forces in Iraq and Zalmay Khalilzad, ambassador to Iraq, issued a joint apology Thursday in which they said, "We understand this is painful, confusing and disturbing,  not only to the family who lost a loved one, but to the Iraqi people as a whole.
Revised:  Gen. George W. Casey Jr., commander of U.S. forces in Iraq and Zalmay Khalilzad, ambassador to Iraq, issued a joint apology Thursday in which they said, "We understand this is painful, confusing and disturbing, " they said, " not only to the family who lost a loved one, but to the Iraqi people as a whole.
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Original:  "We believe that the immunity given to members of coalition forces encouraged them to commit such crimes in cold blood (and) that makes it necessary to review it," was the opinion of Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki during a visit to Kuwait, July 7.
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Original:  He was recently honorably discharged from the Army  because of an alleged "personality disorder."
Revised:  He was honorably discharged from the Army because of an alleged "personality disorder."
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Original:  He was honorably discharged from the Army in May 006 because of an alleged "personality disorder."
Revised:  He was honorably discharged from the Army in May 2006 because of an alleged "personality disorder."
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Original: U.S. federal prosecutors have charged a former U.S. soldier who served in Iraq with the rape and murder of an Iraqi girl and the murder of three members of her family, including the girl's sister believed to be five years old.
Revised: U.S. federal prosecutors have charged a former U.S. soldier who served in Iraq with the rape and murder of a Iraqi girl and the murder of three members of her family, including the girl's sister believed to be five years old.
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Original:  The rape victim was Abeer Qassim Hamza .
Revised:  The rape victim , Abeer Qassim Hamza .
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Original:  Although an FBI affidavit (based on soldiers' accounts) estimated her age to be 25, Reuters released documents Sunday that gave her date of birth as August 19, 1991.
Revised:  Although an FBI affidavit (based on soldiers' accounts) estimated her age to be 25, Reuters obtained documents that gave her date of birth as August 19, 1991.
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Original: Lehmann had the busier match and made eight saves while Gianluca Buffon was troubled by two.
Revised: Lehmann had the busier match and made eight saves while Gianluigi Buffon was troubled by two.
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Original: 50px Two stylish Italian goals minutes from the end of the second period of Extra Time prevented a penalty  shootout and sent Germany out of the FIFA World Cup in Dortmund , Tuesday.
Revised: 50px Two stylish Italian goals minutes from the end of the second period of overtime prevented a penalty shootout and sent Germany out of the FIFA World Cup in Dortmund , Tuesday.
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Original: 50px Two stylish Italian goals minutes from the end of the second period of Extra Time prevented a penalty  shootout and sent Germany out of the FIFA World Cup in Dortmund , Tuesday.
Revised: 50px Two stylish Italian goals minutes from the end of the second period of Extra Time prevented a penalty kick shootout and sent Germany out of the FIFA World Cup in Dortmund , Tuesday.
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Original: 50px Two stylish Italian goals minutes from the end of the second period of Extra Time prevented a penalty  shootout and sent Germany out of the FIFA World Cup in Dortmund , Tuesday.
Revised: 50px Two stylish Italian goals minutes from the end of the second period of Extra Time prevented a penalty shootout and sent Germany out of the FIFA World Cup in Dortmund on Tuesday.
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Original:   Alessandro Del Piero got Italy's second with the last kick of the game , when he clipped high past Lehmann's left hand at the end of a fast break-away with Alberto Gilardino.
Revised:  Alessandro Del Piero got Italy's second with the last kick of the game when he clipped high past Lehmann's left hand at the end of a fast break-away with Alberto Gilardino.
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Original:  Italy played Extra Time with a vigorous intent to win and nearly cracked the Germans in the first two minutes.
Revised:  Italy played overtime with a vigorous intent to win and nearly cracked the Germans in the first two minutes.
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Original:  Italy had an emotional history of penalty  shootout losses at the World Cup, including a defeat in the 1994 World Cup final ;
Revised:  Italy had an emotional history of penalty kick shootout losses at the World Cup, including a defeat in the 1994 World Cup final ;
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Original:  Italy had an emotional history of penalty  shootout losses at the World Cup, including a defeat in the 1994 World Cup final ;
Revised:  Italy had an emotional history of penalty shootout losses at the World Cup, including a defeat in the 1994 World Cup final ,
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Original:  Or indeed save Germany , who had won five World Cup  shootouts in a row , this time .
Revised:  Germany has won a total of five World Cup shootouts in a row , this time .
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Original:  Or indeed save Germany , who had won five World Cup  shootouts in a row , this time .
Revised:  Or indeed save Germany , who had won five World Cup shootouts in a row .
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Original: 50px Two stylish Italian goals minutes from the end of the second period of overtime prevented a penalty kick shootout and sent Germany out of the FIFA World Cup in Dortmund on Tuesday.
Revised: 50px Two stylish Italian goals minutes from the end of the second period of Extra Time prevented a penalty kick shootout and sent Germany out of the FIFA World Cup in Dortmund on Tuesday.
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Original:  Moments after Jens Lehmann had dived to put Andrea Pirlo's 25 yard drive behind for a corner, the German keeper was helpless as Fabio Grosso, found in the area by Pirlo, circled a left foot shot across him just inside the far post during the 119th minute of play .
Revised:  Moments after Jens Lehmann had dived to put Andrea Pirlo's 25 yard drive behind for a corner, the German keeper was helpless as Fabio Grosso, found in the area by Pirlo, circled a left foot shot across him just inside the far post .
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Original:  Germany has won a total of five World Cup PK shootouts in a row.
Revised:  Germany has won a total of five World Cup penalty shootouts in a row.
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Original:  Judging the apperance in the memorial, Lozano has stated the team has 18 valuable players, of which everyone can play in first six .
Revised:  Judging the apperance in the memorial, Lozano has stated the team has 18 valuable players, of which everyone can be in the starting line-up .
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Original: The memorial, which was set up to commemorate Hubert Jerzy Wagner, ex-coach of the most successfull polish national volleyball team in history, who have died in car accident in 2002, was held in both Olsztyn and Ostróda.
Revised: The memorial, which was set up to commemorate Hubert Jerzy Wagner, ex-coach of the most successfull Polish national volleyball team in history, who have died in car accident in 2002, was held in both Olsztyn and Ostróda.
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Original: The memorial, which was set up to commemorate Hubert Jerzy Wagner, ex-coach of the most successfull polish national volleyball team in history, who have died in car accident in 2002, was held in both Olsztyn and Ostróda.
Revised: The memorial, which was set up to commemorate Hubert Jerzy Wagner, ex-coach of the most successfull polish national volleyball team in history, who died in a car accident in 2002, was held in both Olsztyn and Ostróda.
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Original:  Raul Lozano, polish coach, has said in Tuesday, that  main target for  current season is  World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
Revised:  Raul Lozano, Polish coach, has said in Tuesday, that main target for current season is World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
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Original:  Raul Lozano, polish coach, has said in Tuesday, that  main target for  current season is  World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
Revised:  Raul Lozano, polish coach, has said on Tuesday, that main target for current season is World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
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Original:  Raul Lozano, polish coach, has said in Tuesday, that  main target for  current season is  World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
Revised:  Raul Lozano, polish coach, has said in Tuesday, that the main target for current season is World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
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Original:  Raul Lozano, polish coach, has said in Tuesday, that  main target for  current season is  World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
Revised:  Raul Lozano, polish coach, has said in Tuesday, that main target for the current season is World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
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Original:  Raul Lozano, polish coach, has said in Tuesday, that  main target for  current season is  World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
Revised:  Raul Lozano, polish coach, has said in Tuesday, that main target for current season is the World Cup, which will be held in Japan.
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Original:  He added that the victory is dedicated to Arkadiusz Gołaś, former polish national team star, who died in car accident about year ago
Revised:  He added that the victory is dedicated to Arkadiusz Gołaś, former Polish national team star, who died in car accident about year ago
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Original: Poland has won in 4th annual Hubert Jerzy Wagner's Volleyball Memorial , after defeating Cuba 3:1 in the final match.
Revised: Poland has won in 4th annual , after defeating Cuba 3:1 in the final match.
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Original: Poland has won in 4th annual Hubert Jerzy Wagner's Volleyball Memorial , after defeating Cuba 3:1 in the final match.
Revised: Poland has won in 4th annual Hubert Jerzy Wagner's Volleyball Memorial , after defeating 3:1 in the final match.
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Original:  Third place has been taken by Canada , and fourth by Italy . Poland B was 6th.
Revised:  Third place has been taken by Canada , and fourth by . Poland B was 6th.
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