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Original:  The Athens metro will remain open "so as to allow Athenians to join the planned protests in the capital ".
Revised:  The Athens metro will remain open "so as to allow Athenians to join the planned protests in the capital ."
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Original:  Thanassis Pafilis, an MP with the Greek Communist Party, said  the budgetary measures "are a massacre for workers' rights ",adding "It will truly be hell for the working man.
Revised:  Thanassis Pafilis, an MP with the Greek Communist Party, said that the budgetary measures "are a massacre for workers' rights ",adding "It will truly be hell for the working man.
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Original:  Thanassis Pafilis, an MP with the Greek Communist Party, said  the budgetary measures "are a massacre for workers' rights ",adding "It will truly be hell for the working man.
Revised:  Thanassis Pafilis, an MP with the Greek Communist Party, said the budgetary measures "are a massacre for workers' rights ," adding, "It will truly be hell for the working man.
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Original:  The strike must bring everything to a standstill ".
Revised:  The strike must bring everything to a standstill ."
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Original:  With a 16\% unemployment rate in Greece, between 70 \% and 80 \% of Greek citizens oppose the cuts.
Revised:  With a sixteen percent unemployment rate in Greece, between 70 \% and 80 \% of Greek citizens oppose the cuts.
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Original:  With a 16\% unemployment rate in Greece, between 70 \% and 80 \% of Greek citizens oppose the cuts.
Revised:  With a 16\% unemployment rate in Greece, between 70 and 80 \% of Greek citizens oppose the cuts.
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Original:  With a 16\% unemployment rate in Greece, between 70 \% and 80 \% of Greek citizens oppose the cuts.
Revised:  With a 16\% unemployment rate in Greece, between 70 \% and 80 percent of Greek citizens oppose the cuts.
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Original:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair  " according to Evangelos Venizelos, the finance minister, but the government continues to push for austerity measures  as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on  €380 billion in debt owed to the government and private institutions in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
Revised:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair , " according to Evangelos Venizelos, the finance minister, but the government continues to push for austerity measures as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on €380 billion in debt owed to the government and private institutions in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
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Original:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair  " according to Evangelos Venizelos, the finance minister, but the government continues to push for austerity measures  as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on  €380 billion in debt owed to the government and private institutions in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
Revised:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair " according to Evangelos Venizelos, but the government continues to push for austerity measures as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on €380 billion in debt owed to the government and private institutions in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
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Original:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair  " according to Evangelos Venizelos, the finance minister, but the government continues to push for austerity measures  as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on  €380 billion in debt owed to the government and private institutions in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
Revised:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair " according to Evangelos Venizelos, the finance minister, but the government continues to push for austerity measures , as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on €380 billion in debt owed to the government and private institutions in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
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Original:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair  " according to Evangelos Venizelos, the finance minister, but the government continues to push for austerity measures  as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on  €380 billion in debt owed to the government and private institutions in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
Revised:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair " according to Evangelos Venizelos, the finance minister, but the government continues to push for austerity measures as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on the €380 billion in debt owed to the government and private institutions in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
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Original:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair  " according to Evangelos Venizelos, the finance minister, but the government continues to push for austerity measures  as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on  €380 billion in debt owed to the government and private institutions in France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
Revised:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair " according to Evangelos Venizelos, the finance minister, but the government continues to push for austerity measures as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on €380 billion in debt owed to France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain
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Original:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair," said Greek finance minister Evangelos Venizelos, but the government continues to push for austerity measures, as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on the €380 billion in debt owed to France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain  
Revised:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair," said Greek finance minister Evangelos Venizelos, but the government continues to push for austerity measures, as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on the €380 billion in debt owed to France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain . 
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Original:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair," said Greek finance minister Evangelos Venizelos, but the government continues to push for austerity measures, as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on the €380 billion in debt owed to France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain  
Revised:  The measures are "tough and in many respects unfair," said Greek finance minister Evangelos Venizelos, but the government continues to push for austerity measures, as failure to secure credit may force the government and banks of Greece to default as early as July on the €380 billion in debt owed to France, Germany, the United Kingdom, the United States, Italy, Switzerland, Japan and Spain Related new
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Original: Twelve people have died and twenty more wounded by a collapsing wall in the Indian state of .
Revised: Twelve people have died and twenty more were wounded following the collapse of a wall in the Indian state of .
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Original:  The wall came down on people sheltering from heavy rain beneath a shed the wall supported . "I have been told that a shed of my bungalow collapsed where daily wagers gather every day seeking work," said Police Superintendent OP Pal.
Revised:  The wall came down on people sheltering from heavy rain . "I have been told that a shed of my bungalow collapsed where daily wagers gather every day seeking work," said Police Superintendent OP Pal.
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Original:  The wall came down on people sheltering from heavy rain beneath a shed the wall supported . "I have been told that a shed of my bungalow collapsed where daily wagers gather every day seeking work," said Police Superintendent OP Pal.
Revised:  The wall came down on people sheltering from heavy rain beneath a shed the wall supported . "I have been told that a shed of my bungalow collapsed where daily wagers gather every day seeking work," said police superintendent OP Pal.
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Original:  Ambikapur mayor Prabodh Minj said the ten-foot outer wall -  built for security - which collapsed had been unmaintained for years.
Revised:  Ambikapur mayor Prabodh Minj said the ten-foot outer wall - built for security nbdash; had been unmaintained for years.
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Original:  However, he attributes the cause to rainfall
Revised:  However, he attributes the cause of its collapse to the rainfall
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Original: Location of the Spratly Islands US Secretary of State Hillary Clinton shakes hands with Philippine Foreign Secretary Albert del Rosario  The United States and the Philippines began a series of naval exercises earlier this week in the , scheduled to last for 11 days.
Revised: Location of the Spratly Islands US Secretary of State Hillary Clinton with Philippine Foreign Secretary Albert del Rosario The United States and the Philippines began a series of naval exercises earlier this week in the , scheduled to last for 11 days.
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Original:  This comes as a  six-nation dispute has escalated in the sea concerning territorial claims to several islands including the .
Revised:  This comes as a A six-nation dispute has escalated in the sea concerning territorial claims to several islands including the .
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Original:  She has also said that the United States has a “national interest” in , respect for international law and unimpeded lawful commerce in the South China Sea.
Revised:  She has also said that the United States has a "national interest" in , respect for international law and unimpeded lawful commerce in the South China Sea.
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Original:  She has also said that the United States has a “national interest” in , respect for international law and unimpeded lawful commerce in the South China Sea.
Revised:  She has also said that the United States has a “national interest” in , respect for international law , and unimpeded, lawful commerce in the South China Sea.
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Original:   Both countries are bound by a 1951 which obliges either country to aid the defense of the other if either one of them is attacked.
Revised:  " Both countries are bound by a 1951 which obliges either country to aid the defense of the other if either one of them is attacked.
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Original:  She has also said that the United States has a "national interest" in , respect for international law, and unimpeded, lawful commerce in the South China Sea." Both countries are bound by a 1951 which obliges either country to aid the defense of the other if either one of them is attacked .
Revised:  She has also said that the United States has a "national interest" in , respect for international law, and unimpeded, lawful commerce in the South China Sea." Both countries are bound by a 1951 .
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Original: A six-nation dispute has escalated in the sea concerning territorial claims to several islands including the .
Revised: A six-nation dispute has escalated in the sea concerning to several islands including the .
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Original:  A Phillipine military commander stated that the drills are part of an annual series of activities taking place under a defense agreement between the two countries and have nothing to do with the territorial dispute.
Revised:  A Philippine military commander stated that the drills are part of an annual series of activities taking place under a defense agreement between the two countries and have nothing to do with the territorial dispute.
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Original:  The California law banned sales and rentals of violent video games to and included fines for those merchants who violated the ban .
Revised:  The California law banned sales and rentals of violent video games to .
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Original:  Further the video games industry currently has its own ratings system, much like that used for movies, and educates retailers in using the rating system to prevent minors from buying mature-rated games.
Revised:  And the video games industry currently has its own ratings system, much like that used for movies, and educates retailers in using the rating system to prevent minors from buying mature-rated games.
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Original:  The California law banned sales and rentals of violent video games to . Justice , writing for the majority, said that depictions of violence have never been regulated by the US government.
Revised:  The California law banned the sale and rental of violent video games to . Justice , writing for the majority, said that depictions of violence have never been regulated by the US government.
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Original:  Thus violent videos are not to fall under government control as does but is to be accorded the same First Amendment protections as other forms of entertainment.
Revised:  Thus violent videos are not to fall under government control as but is to be accorded the same First Amendment protections as other forms of entertainment.
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Original:  The sales of violent video games is not to be criminalized and California's attempt to do so was "unprecedented and mistaken."
Revised:  The sale of violent video games is not to be criminalized and California's attempt to do so was "unprecedented and mistaken."
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Original:  And " the basic principles of ...do not vary " with a new and different communication medium."
Revised:  And ' the basic principles of ...do not vary " with a new and different communication medium."
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Original:  And " the basic principles of ...do not vary " with a new and different communication medium."
Revised:  And " the basic principles of ...do not vary ' with a new and different communication medium."
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Original:  This ruling does  prevent private retailers from placing restrictions on their sale of video games.
Revised:  This ruling does not prevent private retailers from placing restrictions on their sale of video games.
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Original:  And the video games industry currently has its own ratings system , much like that used for movies, and educates retailers in using the rating system to prevent minors from buying mature-rated games.
Revised:  The video game industry currently has its own ratings system , much like that used for movies, and educates retailers in using the rating system to prevent minors from buying mature-rated games.
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Original:  And the video games industry currently has its own ratings system , much like that used for movies, and educates retailers in using the rating system to prevent minors from buying mature-rated games.
Revised:  And the video games industry currently has its own , much like that used for movies, and educates retailers in using the rating system to prevent minors from buying mature-rated games.
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Original:  Further, parental controls have been added to game console .
Revised:  Further, parental controls have been added to game consoles .
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Original:  The view of  that a better strategy is the education of parents rather than court battles.
Revised:  The view of the that a better strategy is the education of parents rather than court battles.
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Original:  Thus violent videos are not to fall under government control as  but is to be accorded the same First Amendment protections as other forms of entertainment.
Revised:  Thus violent videos are not to fall under government control as does but is to be accorded the same First Amendment protections as other forms of entertainment.
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Original: According to Nadine Kaslow, professor and chief psychologist at and said the evidence regarding the .
Revised: According to Nadine Kaslow, professor and chief psychologist at and , the evidence regarding the .
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Original:  Since California has declined to restrict those other media, e.g., Saturday morning cartoons, its video-game regulation is wildly under inclusive , raising serious doubts about whether the State is pursuing the interest it invokes or is instead disfavoring a particular speaker or viewpoint."
Revised:  Since California has declined to restrict those other media, e.g., Saturday morning cartoons, its video-game regulation is wildly under-inclusive , raising serious doubts about whether the State is pursuing the interest it invokes or is instead disfavoring a particular speaker or viewpoint."
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Original:  In a 7-2 decision handed down on Monday, the  struck down California's violent video game law and ruled that are protected speech covered by the .
Revised:  In a 7-2 decision handed down on Monday, the US Supreme Court struck down California's violent video game law and ruled that are protected speech covered by the .
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Original: Space debris narrowly missed the space station (pictured) Tuesday, forcing the crew into their escape vehicles. passed within a short distance of the International Space Station (ISS) Tuesday, forcing the crew to enter their to be ready to depart in case of a collision.
Revised:  passed within a short distance of the International Space Station (ISS) Tuesday, forcing the crew to enter their to be ready to depart in case of a collision.
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Original:  The debris , which ultimately missed the orbital outpost,  passed within of the station at 12:08 (8:08 ).
Revised:  The debris ultimately missed the orbital outpost, passed within of the station at 12:08 (8:08 ).
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Original:  The debris , which ultimately missed the orbital outpost,  passed within of the station at 12:08 (8:08 ).
Revised:  The debris , which ultimately missed the orbital outpost, and passed within of the station at 12:08 (8:08 ).
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Original: Currently, there are six people aboard the ISS and two Soyuz spacecrafts docked to the station.
Revised: There are six people aboard the ISS and two Soyuz spacecrafts docked to the station.
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Original: This is not the first time that debris has threatened the ISS and its crew , with a similar incident occurring in March 2009.
Revised: This is not the first time that debris has threatened the ISS and its crew . A similar incident occurred in March 2009.
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Original: This is not the first time that debris has threatened the ISS and its crew.
Revised: This is not the first time that debris threatened the ISS and its crew.
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Original:  The debris ultimately missed the orbital outpost , and passed within of the station at 12:08 (8:08 ).
Revised:  The debris ultimately missed the orbital outpost and passed within of the station at 12:08 (8:08 ).
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Original: The Australian Senate  passed a resolution "opposing the death penalty" in response to the looming execution of Van Nguyen , the Australian man found to be trafficking drugs through Singapore, which has a mandatory death sentence policy in regards to drug trafficking matters .
Revised: The Australian Senate has passed a resolution "opposing the death penalty" in response to the looming execution of Van Nguyen , the Australian man found to be trafficking drugs through Singapore, which has a mandatory death sentence policy in regards to drug trafficking matters .
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Original:  There was some argument in the Senate however over the exact wording of the resolution -
Revised:  There was some argument in the Senate , however, over the exact wording of the resolution -
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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens said "abhorrence of the death penalty " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty . " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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Original: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty  " , to which the Government Minister for Justice and Customs  Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
Revised: - the motion as originally moved by Senator Bob Brown of the Australian Greens had said "abhorrence of the death penalty " Minister for Justice and Customs Chris Ellison moved to amend the substitute " opposition to" in place of " abhorrence of" . Green members and Australian Democrat members were angered at this , with Senator Brown saying that " Should we just say , 'We oppose that but we don't abhor it' ?"
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