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Original:  A spokesman at Number 10 , the offical office of the Prime Minister  said "The Prime Minister was informed this morning that his father Ian is seriously ill after suffering a stroke and heart complications while on holiday in France."
Revised:  A spokesman at Number 10 Downing Street, the official office of the Prime Minister said "The Prime Minister was informed this morning that his father Ian is seriously ill after suffering a stroke and heart complications while on holiday in France."
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Original:  A spokesman at Number 10 , the offical office of the Prime Minister  said "The Prime Minister was informed this morning that his father Ian is seriously ill after suffering a stroke and heart complications while on holiday in France."
Revised:  A spokesman at Number 10 , the offical office of the Prime Minister , said "The Prime Minister was informed this morning that his father Ian is seriously ill after suffering a stroke and heart complications while on holiday in France."
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Original:  Cameron made the decision to go to France after speaking to his fathers doctors.
Revised:  Cameron made the decision to go to France after speaking to his father's doctors.
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Original:  This session of Prime Minister's Questions is the first sitting since parliament rose for the summer recess at the end of July.
Revised:  Today's session of Prime Minister's Questions is the first sitting since parliament rose for the summer recess at the end of July.
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Original:  This session of Prime Minister's Questions is the first sitting since parliament rose for the summer recess at the end of July.
Revised:  This session of Prime Minister's Questions is the first since Parliament rose for the summer recess at the end of July.
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Original:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handeling the questions acting Labour leader Harriet Harman will also stand down.
Revised:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handling the questions, acting Labour leader Harriet Harman will also stand down.
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Original:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handeling the questions acting Labour leader Harriet Harman will also stand down.
Revised:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handeling the questions acting Labour leader Harriet Harman also stood down.
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Original: File:David Cameron - World Economic Forum Annual Meeting Davos 2010.jpg|British Prime Minister David Cameron in January 2010 ]] British Prime Minister David Cameron has cancelled all of his political engagements and missed Prime Minister's Questions to be with his ill father in France.
Revised: File:David Cameron - World Economic Forum Annual Meeting Davos 2010.jpg|British Prime Minister David Cameron in January 2010 ]] British Prime Minister David Cameron has cancelled his political engagements and missed Prime Minister's Questions to be with his ill father in France.
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Original:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handling the questions , acting Labour leader Harriet Harman also stood down  . Nick Clegg said in his opening statement that he wishes " David Cameron and his family well ". Standing in for Harman, Jack Straw also sent the Prime Minister his best wishes and said he made the "  right decision" to be with his father.
Revised:  As the Prime Minister is away , acting Labour leader Harriet Harman also stood down . Nick Clegg said in his opening statement that he wishes " David Cameron and his family well ". Standing in for Harman, Jack Straw also sent the Prime Minister his best wishes and said he made the " right decision" to be with his father.
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Original:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handling the questions , acting Labour leader Harriet Harman also stood down  . Nick Clegg said in his opening statement that he wishes " David Cameron and his family well ". Standing in for Harman, Jack Straw also sent the Prime Minister his best wishes and said he made the "  right decision" to be with his father.
Revised:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handling the questions , acting Labour leader Harriet Harman also stood down . Nick Clegg said in his opening statement that he wishes " the Prime Minister ... his father and his family well ". Standing in for Harman, Jack Straw also sent the Prime Minister his best wishes and said he made the " right decision" to be with his father.
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Original:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handling the questions , acting Labour leader Harriet Harman also stood down  . Nick Clegg said in his opening statement that he wishes " David Cameron and his family well ". Standing in for Harman, Jack Straw also sent the Prime Minister his best wishes and said he made the "  right decision" to be with his father.
Revised:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handling the questions , acting Labour leader Harriet Harman also stood down . Nick Clegg said in his opening statement that he wishes " David Cameron and his family all best wishes at this difficult time ". Standing in for Harman, Jack Straw also sent the Prime Minister his best wishes and said he made the " right decision" to be with his father.
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Original:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handling the questions , acting Labour leader Harriet Harman also stood down  . Nick Clegg said in his opening statement that he wishes " David Cameron and his family well ". Standing in for Harman, Jack Straw also sent the Prime Minister his best wishes and said he made the "  right decision" to be with his father.
Revised:  As the Prime Minister is away and deputy leader Nick Clegg is handling the questions , acting Labour leader Harriet Harman also stood down . Nick Clegg said in his opening statement that he wishes " David Cameron and his family well ". Standing in for Harman, Jack Straw also sent the Prime Minister his best wishes and said he made " right decision" to be with his father.
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Original:  Number 10 also said that Cameron's brother and sister have  travelled to France together
Revised:  Number 10 also said that Cameron's brother and sister have also travelled to France together
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Original:  Number 10 also said that Cameron's brother and sister have  travelled to France together
Revised:  Number 10 also said that Cameron's brother and sister have travelled to France 
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Original:  He added "I apologise unreservedly to our visitors for the crass reaction to their anthem  
Revised:  He added "I apologise unreservedly to our visitors for the crass reaction to their anthem ." 
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Original:  In the final minuets of extra time Stephen McManus scored with a header to put Scotland to the top of Group 
Revised:  In the final minuets of extra time Stephen McManus scored with a header to put Scotland to the top of Group I
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Original: The logo of the Scottish Football Association The Scottish Football Association has appologised after fans booed  Liechtenstein national team during their national anthem at the Euro 2012 qualifier.
Revised: The logo of the Scottish Football Association The Scottish Football Association has appologised after fans booed the Liechtenstein national team during their national anthem at the Euro 2012 qualifier.
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Original: The logo of the Scottish Football Association The Scottish Football Association has appologised after fans booed  Liechtenstein national team during their national anthem at the Euro 2012 qualifier.
Revised: The logo of the Scottish Football Association The Scottish Football Association has appologised after fans booed Liechtenstein national team during their national anthem at last night's Euro 2012 qualifier.
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Original:  A section of the Scottish fans started to jeer the anthem due to the similarity to God Save the Queen.
Revised:  A section of the Scottish fans started to jeer the anthem due to its similarity to God Save the Queen.
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Original:  Mario Frick scored first for Liechtenstein just after the start of the seconf half . But Kenny Miller later scored off the bar to equalise the game.
Revised:  Mario Frick scored first for Liechtenstein just after the start of the seconf half , but Kenny Miller later scored off the bar to equalise the game.
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Original: The logo of the Scottish Football Association The Scottish Football Association has appologised after fans booed the Liechtenstein national team during their national anthem at last night's Euro 2012 qualifier.
Revised: The logo of the Scottish Football Association The Scottish Football Association has apologized after fans booed the Liechtenstein national team during their national anthem at last night's Euro 2012 qualifier.
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Original:  Mario Frick scored first for Liechtenstein just after the start of the seconf half, but Kenny Miller later scored off the bar to equalise the game.
Revised:  Mario Frick scored first for Liechtenstein just after the start of the second half, but Kenny Miller later scored off the bar to equalise the game.
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Original:  In the final minuets of extra time Stephen McManus scored with a header to put Scotland to the top of Group I
Revised:  In the final minutes of extra time Stephen McManus scored with a header to put Scotland to the top of Group I
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Original: The logo of the Scottish Football Association The Scottish Football Association has apologized after fans booed the Liechtenstein national team during their national anthem at last night's Euro 2012 qualifier.
Revised: The logo of the Scottish Football Association The Scottish Football Association has apologised after fans booed the Liechtenstein national team during their national anthem at last night's Euro 2012 qualifier.
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Original: In a press conference on Thursday, Pastor Jones announced that "we have agreed to cancel our event on Saturday and on Saturday I have agreed to meet with the Imam."
Revised: In a press conference on Thursday, Jones announced that "we have agreed to cancel our event on Saturday and on Saturday I have agreed to meet with the Imam."
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Original:  Yesterday morning, US president Barack Obama responded, "  what he's proposing to do is completely contrary to our values as Americans," and warned, "This is a recruitment bonanza for Al Qaeda."
Revised:  Yesterday morning, US president Barack Obama responded, " ... what he's proposing to do is completely contrary to our values as Americans," and warned, "This is a recruitment bonanza for Al Qaeda."
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Original: ]] The leader of a Gainesville, Florida church , who announced yesterday that the church has cancelled its plan to burn  Qur'an on Saturday, later announced that he has reconsidered his decision.
Revised: ]] The leader of a Gainesville, Florida church announced yesterday that the church has cancelled its plan to burn Qur'an on Saturday, later announced that he has reconsidered his decision.
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Original: ]] The leader of a Gainesville, Florida church , who announced yesterday that the church has cancelled its plan to burn  Qur'an on Saturday, later announced that he has reconsidered his decision.
Revised: ]] The leader of a Gainesville, Florida church , who announced yesterday that the church had cancelled its plan to burn Qur'an on Saturday, later announced that he has reconsidered his decision.
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Original: ]] The leader of a Gainesville, Florida church , who announced yesterday that the church has cancelled its plan to burn  Qur'an on Saturday, later announced that he has reconsidered his decision.
Revised: ]] The leader of a Gainesville, Florida church , who announced yesterday that the church has cancelled its plan to burn Qur'an on Saturday, but later stated that he had reconsidered his decision.
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Original:  Earlier yesterday, Pastor Terry Jones said that the Dove World Outreach Center would cancel the burning of the Islamic holy book, stating that Imam Feisal Abdul Rauf, who plans to build a mosque and community center  a few hundred meters away from the site of the September 11, 2001 attacks , has agreed to relocate the mosque, which is named Park51 .
Revised:  Earlier yesterday, Pastor Terry Jones said that the Dove World Outreach Center would cancel the burning of the Islamic holy book, stating that Imam Feisal Abdul Rauf, who plans to build a mosque and community center to be located a few hundred meters away from the site of the September 11, 2001 attacks , has agreed to relocate the mosque, which is named Park51 .
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Original:  Earlier yesterday, Pastor Terry Jones said that the Dove World Outreach Center would cancel the burning of the Islamic holy book, stating that Imam Feisal Abdul Rauf, who plans to build a mosque and community center  a few hundred meters away from the site of the September 11, 2001 attacks , has agreed to relocate the mosque, which is named Park51 .
Revised:  Earlier yesterday, Pastor Terry Jones said that the Dove World Outreach Center would cancel the burning of the Islamic holy book, stating that Imam Feisal Abdul Rauf, who plans to build a mosque and community center a few hundred meters away from the site of the September 11, 2001 attacks .
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Original:  However, the imam has denied that he struck a deal with the pastor, saying that he was surprised by the announcement of a deal.
Revised:  However, Rauf has denied that he struck a deal with the pastor, saying that he was surprised by the announcement of a deal.
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Original:  Rauf followed up, stating that "We are not going to toy with our religion or any other.
Revised:  He followed up, stating that "We are not going to toy with our religion or any other.
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Original:  Earlier, on Wednesday, Jones had announced his intention to go ahead with the September 11 Qur'an burning.
Revised:  On Wednesday, Jones had announced his intention to go ahead with the September 11 Qur'an burning.
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Original:  Jones had said that he has support from churches around the United States, and also said that people from around the country have been mailing him Qur'ans to burn.
Revised:  He also said that he has support from churches around the United States, and also said that people from around the country have been mailing him Qur'ans to burn.
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Original:  Jones had said that he has support from churches around the United States, and also said that people from around the country have been mailing him Qur'ans to burn.
Revised:  Jones had said that he has support from churches around the United States, and that people from around the country have been mailing him Qur'ans to burn.
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Original:  The pastor also said that he has received over 100 death threats and for defense, now carries a gun on his hip .
Revised:  The pastor also said that he has received over 100 death threats and has taken to carrying a gun on his hip .
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Original:  Even though the church announced that it would continue with the plan, if Jones reconsiders, he could run into trouble as the Gainesville fire department has denied the church a permit to burn the Qur'ans.
Revised:  Even though the church announced that it would continue with the plan, Jones could run into trouble as the Gainesville fire department has denied the church a permit to burn the Qur'ans.
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Original:  In his interview recorded on Wednesday for Good Morning America, Obama added that "this stunt that he is talking about pulling could greatly endanger our young men and women in uniform who are in Iraq, who are in Afghanistan" .
Revised:  In his interview recorded on Wednesday for Good Morning America, Obama stated that "this stunt that he is talking about pulling could greatly endanger our young men and women in uniform who are in Iraq, who are in Afghanistan" .
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Original:  Clinton called it a "disrespectful, disgraceful act," while US Attorney General Eric Holder pitched in, calling the book burning "idiotic and dangerous."
Revised:  She called it a "disrespectful, disgraceful act," while US Attorney General Eric Holder pitched in, calling the book burning "idiotic and dangerous."
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Original:  In Indonesia, Afghanistan and Pakistan, people took to the streets in the Muslim-majority countries to protestthe plan .
Revised:  People took to the streets in the Muslim-majority countries to protestthe plan .
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Original:  In Indonesia, Afghanistan and Pakistan, people took to the streets in the Muslim-majority countries to protestthe plan .
Revised:  In Indonesia, Afghanistan and Pakistan, people took to the streets in the Muslim-majority countries of Afghanistan and Pakistan in protest .
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Original:  In Indonesia, the country with the world's largest Muslim population, thousands  gathered around the U.S. Embassy in Jakarta on Monday to protest .
Revised:  In Indonesia, the country with the world's largest Muslim population, thousands of protesters gathered around the U.S. Embassy in Jakarta on Monday to protest .
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Original:  In Indonesia, the country with the world's largest Muslim population, thousands  gathered around the U.S. Embassy in Jakarta on Monday to protest .
Revised:  In Indonesia, the country with the world's largest Muslim population, thousands gathered around the U.S. Embassy in Jakarta on Monday .
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Original: ]] The leader of a Gainesville, Florida church announced yesterday that the church had cancelled its plan to burn copies of the Qur'an on Saturday, but later stated that he had reconsidered his decision.
Revised: ]] The leader of a Gainesville, Florida church announced yesterday that the church had canceled its plan to burn copies of the Qur'an on Saturday, but later stated that he had reconsidered his decision.
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Original:  The pastor also said that he has received over 100 death threats and has taken to carrying a gun on his hip for self-defence .
Revised:  The pastor also said that he has received over 100 death threats and has taken to carrying a gun on his hip for self-defense .
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Original: The developer of the "Ground Zero mosque " also denied that a deal had been reached with Jones, stating that "The Muslim community center called Park51 in lower Manhattan is not being moved.
Revised: The developer of the New York City mosque in question also denied that a deal had been reached with Jones, stating that "The Muslim community center called Park51 in lower Manhattan is not being moved.
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Original:  It is very hard to explain to people why this sort of conduct should be permitted,"  Stephen Gillers,  New York University law professor, said .
Revised:  It is very hard to explain to people why this sort of conduct should be permitted," said Stephen Gillers, New York University law professor, said .
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Original:  It is very hard to explain to people why this sort of conduct should be permitted,"  Stephen Gillers,  New York University law professor, said .
Revised:  It is very hard to explain to people why this sort of conduct should be permitted," Stephen Gillers, a law professor at New York University law professor, said .
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Original:  It is very hard to explain to people why this sort of conduct should be permitted,"  Stephen Gillers,  New York University law professor, said .
Revised:  It is very hard to explain to people why this sort of conduct should be permitted," Stephen Gillers, New York University .
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Original: File:David Cameron - World Economic Forum Annual Meeting Davos 2010.jpg|Prime Minister David Cameron travelled to France thsi morning]]
Revised: File:David Cameron - World Economic Forum Annual Meeting Davos 2010.jpg|Prime Minister David Cameron travelled to France this morning]]
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Original:  The father of British Prime Minister David Cameron has died after suffering a stroke in France.
Revised:  The father of British Prime Minister David Cameron has died after suffering in France.
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Original:  The father of British Prime Minister David Cameron has died after suffering in France . 77 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on holiday.
Revised:  The father of British Prime Minister David Cameron died in France today . 77 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on holiday.
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Original:  David Cameron traveled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was ill.
Revised:  David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was ill.
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Original:  David Cameron missed today's edition of Prime Minister's Question's and cancelled all political engagments to travel to France.
Revised:  David Cameron missed today's session of Prime Minister's Question's and cancelled all political engagments to travel to France.
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Original:  David Cameron missed today's edition of Prime Minister's Question's and cancelled all political engagments to travel to France.
Revised:  David Cameron missed today's edition of Prime Minister's Question's and cancelled his political engagements to travel to France.
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Original:  Speaking of his father in March, Cameron said to ITV reporter Sir Trevor McDonald "My father is a huge hero figure for me, because he's an amazingly brave man....
Revised:  Speaking of his father in March, Cameron told ITV reporter Sir Trevor McDonald "My father is a huge hero figure for me, because he's an amazingly brave man....
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Original:  77 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on holiday . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was ill . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after  the Prime Minister arrived at the hospital.
Revised:  27 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on holiday . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was ill . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after the Prime Minister arrived at the hospital.
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Original:  77 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on holiday . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was ill . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after  the Prime Minister arrived at the hospital.
Revised:  77 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on holiday . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was lol . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after the Prime Minister arrived at the hospital.
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Original:  77 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on holiday . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was ill . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after  the Prime Minister arrived at the hospital.
Revised:  77 year-old Ian Cameron suffered a stroke while on holiday . David Cameron travelled to France this morning after hearing the news that his father was ill . A Downing Street spokesman said that Ian died shortly after raping the Prime Minister arrived at the hospital.
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Original:  Speaking of his father in March, Cameron told ITV reporter Sir Trevor McDonald "My father is a huge hero figure for me, because he's an amazingly brave man....
Revised:  Speaking of his father in March, Cameron told ITV reporter Sir Trevor McDonald "My father is a huge pedo figure for me, because he's an amazingly brave man....
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