wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  We  are thus what Metzinger calls naïve realists, who believe we are perceiving reality directly when in actuality we are only perceiving representations of reality.
Revised:  We are thus what Metzinger calls naïve realists, who believe we are perceiving reality directly when in actuality they are only perceiving representations of reality.
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Original:  The data structures and transport mechanisms of the data are “transparent” so that we can introspect on our representations of perceptions, but cannot introspect on the data or mechanisms themselves.
Revised:  The data structures and transport mechanisms of the data are "transparent" so that people can introspect on our representations of perceptions, but cannot introspect on the data or mechanisms themselves.
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Original:  The data structures and transport mechanisms of the data are “transparent” so that we can introspect on our representations of perceptions, but cannot introspect on the data or mechanisms themselves.
Revised:  The data structures and transport mechanisms of the data are “transparent” so that we can introspect on their representations of perceptions, but cannot introspect on the data or mechanisms themselves.
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Original:  Subjective experience is the result of the Phenomenal Model of Intentionality Relationship (PMIR).
Revised:  Subjective experience is the result of the phenomenal model of intentionality relationship (PMIR).
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Original:  Category:  Consciousness studies Category:Theory of mind Category:Subjective experience Category:Specific models Category:Metaphysics of mi
Revised:  Category: Consciousness studies Category:Theory of mind Category:Subjective experience Category:Metaphysics of mi
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Original:  To survive, they require species-specific conservation interventions (e.g. control of predators, competitors, nest parasites, prescribed burns, altered hydrological processes, etc  ) and thus they are conservation-reliant.
Revised:  To survive, they require species-specific conservation interventions (e.g. control of predators, competitors, nest parasites, prescribed burns, altered hydrological processes, etc . ) and thus they are conservation-reliant.
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Original: Recognizing the conservation reliance of tigers, Project Tiger is establishing a national science based framework for monitoring tiger population trends in order to manage the species more effectively.
Revised: Recognizing the conservation reliance of tigers, Project Tiger is establishing a national science-based framework for monitoring tiger population trends in order to manage the species more effectively.
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Original:  Viewing "recovery" of "conservation-reliant species" as a continuum of phases rather  a simple "recovered/not recovered" status may enhance the ability to manage such species within the framework of the Endangered Species Act.
Revised:  Viewing "recovery" of "conservation-reliant species" as a continuum of phases rather than a simple "recovered/not recovered" status may enhance the ability to manage such species within the framework of the Endangered Species Act.
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Original:  He was also a Soviet historian of the Russian revolutionary movement.
Revised:  He also became a Soviet historian of the Russian revolutionary movement.
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Original:  Life and political career Teodorovich, the son of a land surveyor from Smolensk, was born into a family of ethnic Polish origin.
Revised:  Life and political career Teodorovich, the son of a land-surveyor from Smolensk, was born into a family of ethnic Polish origin.
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Original:  it was from this background, Teodorovich would write, that he first learned to hate " czarism , its officials, and military establishment.
Revised:  from this background, Teodorovich would write, that he first learned to hate " czarism , its officials, and military establishment.
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Original:  it was from this background, Teodorovich would write, that he first learned to hate " czarism , its officials, and military establishment.
Revised:  it was from this background, Teodorovich would write, he first learned to hate " czarism , its officials, and military establishment.
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Original:  it was from this background, Teodorovich would write, that he first learned to hate " czarism , its officials, and military establishment.
Revised:  it was from this background, Teodorovich would write, that he first learned to hate " tsarism , its officials, and military establishment.
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Original:  it was from this background, Teodorovich would write, that he first learned to hate " czarism , its officials, and military establishment.
Revised:  it was from this background, Teodorovich would write, that he first learned to hate " czarism , its officials, and the
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Original:   " Teodorovich's childhood was spent in severe poverty: his mother, struggling to support six sons, worked as a seamstress and laundrywoman.
Revised:  military establishment " Teodorovich's childhood was spent in severe poverty: his mother, struggling to support six sons, worked as a seamstress and laundrywoman.
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Original:   " Teodorovich's childhood was spent in severe poverty: his mother, struggling to support six sons, worked as a seamstress and laundrywoman.
Revised:  " . Teodorovich spent his childhood in severe poverty: his mother, struggling to support six sons, worked as a seamstress and laundrywoman.
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Original:  Teodorovich was educated at Moscow State University, where he joined an early Marxist group in 1895.
Revised:  Teodorovich attended Moscow State University, where he joined an early Marxist group in 1895.
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Original:  From 1902 to 1903 , he was a member of the Moscow Committee of the Russian Social Democratic Labour Party.
Revised:  From 1902 to 1903 he served as a member of the Moscow Committee of the Russian Social Democratic Labour Party.
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Original:  After a series of arrests, in 1903 the czarist authorities sent Teodorovich to an exile in Yakutia.
Revised:  After a series of arrests, in 1903 the tsarist authorities sent Teodorovich to an exile in Yakutia.
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Original:  After a series of arrests, in 1903 the czarist authorities sent Teodorovich to an exile in Yakutia.
Revised:  After a series of arrests, in 1903 the czarist authorities sent Teodorovich into exile in Yakutia.
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Original:  Escaping in 1905, he fled to Switzerland, where he made personal contacts with Vladimir Lenin.
Revised:  Escaping in 1905, he fled to Switzerland, where he made personal contact with Vladimir Lenin.
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Original:  In October 1905 Teodorovich returned to Russia and operated in Saint Petersburg , promoted to a member of the Central Committee in 1907.
Revised:  In October 1905 Teodorovich returned to Russia and operated in Saint Petersburg ; he gained promotion to become a member of the Central Committee in 1907.
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Original:  In Summer 1917 Teodorovich co-chaired Saint Petersburg City Hall, at the same time working towards the Bolshevik revolt against the Provisional Government.
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Original:  After the February Revolution of  1917 , he left the place of exile , arrived in Petrograd in mid-March.
Revised:  After the February Revolution of 1917 he left his place of exile , arrived in Petrograd in mid-March.
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Original:  After the February Revolution of  1917 , he left the place of exile , arrived in Petrograd in mid-March.
Revised:  After the February Revolution of 1917 , he left the place of exile and arrived in Petrograd in mid-March.
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Original:  From August 1917 , deputy chairman of the Petrograd City Council, then a member of the council and special presence in food.
Revised:  From August 1917 he served as deputy chairman of the Petrograd City Council, then a member of the council and special presence in food.
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Original:  From August 1917 , deputy chairman of the Petrograd City Council, then a member of the council and special presence in food.
Revised:  From August 1917 , deputy chairman of the , then as a member of the council and special presence in food.
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Original:  After the October Revolution  in the first composition, SNK took the post of People's Commissar for Food.
Revised:  After the October Revolution in the first Council of People's Commissars of the Russian Soviet Federative Socialist Republic (SNK) he took the post of People's Commissar for Food.
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Original:  Immediately after the October Revolution, Teodorovich became the first Commissar for Agriculture in the first Bolshevik Government .
Revised:  Immediately after the October Revolution, Teodorovich became the first Commissar for Agriculture in the first Bolshevik government .
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Original:  In November he resigned due to political disagreement with Lenin's majority over a  coalition with the Mensheviks and other factions (Teodorovich supported a broad coalition, against Lenin's will).
Revised:  In November he resigned due to political disagreement with Lenin's majority over a proposed coalition with the Mensheviks and other factions (Teodorovich supported a broad coalition, against Lenin's will).
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Original:  In 1920 he returned to the board of the Commissariat for Agriculture and rose to  Deputy Commissar in May 1922;
Revised:  In 1920 he returned to the board of the Commissariat for Agriculture and rose to become Deputy Commissar in May 1922;
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Original:  in 1928-1930 he chaired the Peasants branch of Comintern.
Revised:  in 1928-1930 he chaired the Peasants ' branch of the Comintern.
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Original:  He was a supporter of the creation of a homogeneous socialist government with the participation of the Mensheviks and Socialist Revolutionaries.
Revised:  He supported the formation of a homogeneous socialist government with the participation of the Mensheviks and Socialist Revolutionaries.
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Original:  At the beginning of 1918 he left for Siberia after parting ways with Lenin's first government.
Revised:  At the beginning of 1918 Teodorovich left for Siberia after parting ways with Lenin's first government.
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Original:  In the years 1919-1920 , he was in the red partisan units in Siberia.
Revised:  In 1919-1920 , he was in the red partisan units in Siberia.
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Original:  In the years 1919-1920 , he was in the red partisan units in Siberia.
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Original:  The trial was sanctioned by Joseph Stalin and Vyacheslav Molotov  on September 15, 1937.
Revised:  Joseph Stalin and Vyacheslav Molotov on September 15, 1937.
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Original:  The trial was sanctioned by Joseph Stalin and Vyacheslav Molotov  on September 15, 1937.
Revised:  The trial was sanctioned by Joseph Stalin and Vyacheslav Molotov sanctioned the trial on September 15, 1937.
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Original:  He was a victim of Stalin's Great Purges . "March 1, 1881 , "  M., 1931
Revised:  He was a victim of Stalin's Great Purge . "March 1, 1881 , " M., 1931
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Original:  He was a victim of Stalin's Great Purges . "March 1, 1881 , "  M., 1931
Revised:  He was a victim of Stalin's Great Purges . "March 1, 1881 " M., 1931
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Original:  He was a victim of Stalin's Great Purges . "March 1, 1881 , "  M., 1931
Revised:  He was a victim of Stalin's Great Purges . "March 1, 1881 , " , M., 1931
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Original:  Pelli DG (1990) The quantum efficiency of vision. in Vision: Coding and Efficiency (C. Blakemore, ed.) Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, pp. 3–24
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Original: Early life Francisco Javier Sauza was born in Tecolotian , Mexico on December 8, 1903 to Don Eladio Sauza (1883 – 1946) and Doña Silveria Mora Enriquez.
Revised: Early life Francisco Javier Sauza was born in Tecolotlan , Mexico on December 8, 1903 to Don Eladio Sauza (1883 – 1946) and Doña Silveria Mora Enriquez.
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Original: In 1950  Francisco Javier added the Sauza Hornitos brand to the Sauza family of tequila.
Revised: In 1950 , Francisco Javier added the Sauza Hornitos brand to the Sauza family of tequila.
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Original:  In 1963  he created Sauza Conmemorativo, a tequila that commemorated the 90th anniversary of the La Perseverancia distillery.
Revised:  In 1963 , he created Sauza Conmemorativo, a tequila that commemorated the 90th anniversary of the La Perseverancia distillery.
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Original: Eventually: Denominación de origen en cinco estados de la República Mexicana (Guanajuato, Michoacán, Tamaulipas, Nayarit y por supuesto en todo el estado de Jalisco ya que en los cuatro anteriores sólo se puede producir en algunos municipios, los fronterizos a Jalisco) Only Five States in México can produce "Tequila" by this decree.
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Original:  More broadly, the ideas and spirit of NRR have influenced a growing movement of rural experimentation, including many activists who do not use the term "NRR". 
Revised:  More broadly, the ideas and spirit of NRR have influenced a growing movement of rural experimentation, including many activists who do not use the term "NRR". New
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Original:  More broadly, the ideas and spirit of NRR have influenced a growing movement of rural experimentation, including many activists who do not use the term "NRR". New
Revised:  More broadly, the ideas and spirit of NRR have influenced a growing movement of rural experimentation, including many activists who do not use the term "NRR". 
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Original:  She was only allowed to see Puyi on rare occasions, and his upbringing was entrusted to palace eunuchs and maids.
Revised:  She was only allowed to see Puyi ofudifididudn rare occasions, and his upbringing was entrusted to palace eunuchs and maids.
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Original: vital rates, relative frequencies of vital occurrences that affect changes in the size and composition of a population.
Revised: Vital rates, relative frequencies of vital occurrences that affect changes in the size and composition of a population.
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Original:  therefore, the proportion of aged persons in the population—e.g. , References
Revised:  therefore, the proportion of aged persons in the population—e.g. References
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Original: Vital rates , relative frequencies of vital occurrences that affect changes in the size and composition of a population.
Revised: Vital rates are relative frequencies of vital occurrences that affect changes in the size and composition of a population.
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Original: The dynamic trimming method is developed by a team of marine system experts, software architects, programmers, naval architects and captains at Eniram Ltd.
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Original:  External links URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dynamic trimming can help cut fuel consumption by several percentages.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dynamic trimming can help cut fuel consumption by several percentages.
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Original:  External links URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dynamic trimming can help cut fuel consumption by several percentages.
Revised:  External links URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: Dynamic trimming is a method of operating seagoing vessels in a way that ensures minimum water resistance in all circumstances.
Revised: A Dynamic trimming system operates seagoing vessels to achieve minimum water resistance in all circumstances.
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Original: Dynamic trimming is a method of operating seagoing vessels in a way that ensures minimum water resistance in all circumstances.
Revised: Dynamic trimming is a method of operating seagoing vessels in a way that ensures minimum water resistance under all circumstances.
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Original:  The method is based on collection and multidimensional analysis of exact real-time data  on vessel attitude  .
Revised:  It is based on collection and multidimensional analysis of exact real-time data on vessel attitude .
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Original:  The method is based on collection and multidimensional analysis of exact real-time data  on vessel attitude  .
Revised:  The method is based on multidimensional analysis of exact real-time data on vessel attitude .
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Original:  The method is based on collection and multidimensional analysis of exact real-time data  on vessel attitude  .
Revised:  The method is based on collection and multidimensional analysis of real-time data on vessel attitude .
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Original:  The method is based on collection and multidimensional analysis of exact real-time data  on vessel attitude  .
Revised:  The method is based on collection and multidimensional analysis of exact real-time data collected on vessel attitude .
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Original:  The method is based on automatized retrieval of data from operational vessel management applications and purpose-built sensors using sensor network technology .
Revised:  Dynamic trimming automates data retrieval from sensor networks for vessel management software applications .
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Original:  The method is aimed to help officers ensure their vessels are operated right .
Revised:  The system helps officers ensure that their vessels are operated right .
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Original:  The method is aimed to help officers ensure their vessels are operated right .
Revised:  The method is aimed to help officers ensure their vessels are operated efficiently .
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Original:  The key metrics are brought to vessel officers in a graphic form to facilitate decision-making.
Revised:  The key metrics are graphically displayed to facilitate decision-making.
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Original:  The data helps vessel officers to optimize trim at all times , thus minimizing water resistance  .
Revised:  The system aims to continuously optimize vessel trim , thus minimizing water resistance .
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Original: Dynamic trimming automates data retrieval from sensor networks  for vessel management software applications.
Revised: Dynamic trimming automates data retrieval from sensor networks , for vessel management software applications.
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Original: On April 9, 1994, immediately following Habyarimana's assassination and the beginning of the Rwandan Genocide , she was airlifted out of Rwanda by French troops and arrived in Paris 8 days later.
Revised: On April 9, 1994, immediately following Habyarimana's assassination and the beginning of the Rwandan genocide , she was airlifted out of Rwanda by French troops and arrived in Paris 8 days later.
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Original:  She was arrested on Tuesday, March 2, 2010  following French President Nicolas Sarkozy's visit to Rwanda where he admitted to mistakes made by France over the genocide, further stating that France would seek out those responsible for the genocide who were living in France.
Revised:  She was arrested on Tuesday, March 2, 2010 , following French President Nicolas Sarkozy's visit to Rwanda where he admitted to mistakes made by France over the genocide, further stating that France would seek out those responsible for the genocide who were living in France.
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Original: On April 9 , 1994, immediately following Habyarimana's assassination and the beginning of the Rwandan genocide, she was airlifted out of Rwanda by French troops and arrived in Paris 8 days later.
Revised: On 9 , 1994, immediately following Habyarimana's assassination and the beginning of the Rwandan genocide, she was airlifted out of Rwanda by French troops and arrived in Paris 8 days later.
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Original:  Upon arrival in Paris, she received a gift of ₣ 230  000 from the French government, from a budget allocated for "urgent assistance for Rwandan refugees".
Revised:  Upon arrival in Paris, she received a gift of ₣ 230 , 000 from the French government, from a budget allocated for "urgent assistance for Rwandan refugees".
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Original:  She was denied political asylum in France on January 4 , 2007 where she filed in January 2004, but remained in France.
Revised:  She was denied political asylum in France on 4 , 2007 where she filed in January 2004, but remained in France.
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Original:  She was arrested on Tuesday, March 2 , 2010, following French President Nicolas Sarkozy's visit to Rwanda where he admitted to mistakes made by France over the genocide, further stating that France would seek out those responsible for the genocide who were living in France.
Revised:  She was arrested on Tuesday, 2 , 2010, following French President Nicolas Sarkozy's visit to Rwanda where he admitted to mistakes made by France over the genocide, further stating that France would seek out those responsible for the genocide who were living in France.
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Original:  She was the centre of a powerful clique of northern Hutus called le clan de madame or akazu (Kinyarwanda for "little house"), an informal organization of Hutu extremists whose members contributed strongly to the 1994 Rwandan genocide.
Revised:  She was the centre of a powerful clique of northern Hutus called akazu (Kinyarwanda for "little house"), an informal organization of Hutu extremists whose members contributed strongly to the 1994 Rwandan genocide.
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Original: Profile Real Name Jason Roy-Léveillée Birthdate October 1, 1983 Birthplace Saint-Quentin, New Brunswick, Canada Height 6'3 '' (1.91m) Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007  À vos marques , party!
Revised: Profile Real Name Jason Roy-Léveillée Birthdate October 1, 1983 Birthplace Saint-Quentin, New Brunswick, Canada Height 6'3 (1.91m) Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 À vos marques , party!
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Original: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) '' - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 Le Ring (The Fight ) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009  À vos marques...
Revised: Filmography 1996 Virginie - as Steve Ferron 2001 Ramdam - as Jean-Félix Beaupré 2002 Lance et Compte: La nouvelle génération - as Guy Lambert 2002 Maux d'amour - as Steve-Pierre Lawrence 2004 Lance et Compte: La reconquête - as Guy Lambert 2006 Lance et Compte: La revanche - as Guy Lambert 2007 Taking the Plunge (À vos marques... party!) - as Frédérick Bédard 2007 Le Ring (The Fight ) - as Max 2008 Amandine Malabul - as Charlie Martur 2009 À vos marques...
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