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Original:  This can lead to consumer's being indecisive, unhappy, and even refrain from making the choice (purchase) at all.
Revised:  This can lead to consumers being indecisive, unhappy, and even refrain from making the choice (purchase) at all.
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Original: The Pathet Lao ( Lao: ປະເທດລາວ pa thēt lāo, "Lao Nation" ), officially the Lao People's Liberation Army, was a communist political movement and organization in Laos, formed in the mid-20th century.
Revised: The Pathet Lao ( ), officially the Lao People's Liberation Army, was a communist political movement and organization in Laos, formed in the mid-20th century.
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Original:  Originally the Lao Issara, an anti-French, non-communist nationalist movement formed on October 12 , 1945, it was renamed the "Pathet Lao" in 1950, when it was adopted by Lao forces under Souphanouvong, who joined the Viet Minh's revolt against the colonial French authorities in Indochina during the First Indochina War.
Revised:  Originally the Lao Issara, an anti-French, non-communist nationalist movement formed on 12 , 1945, it was renamed the "Pathet Lao" in 1950, when it was adopted by Lao forces under Souphanouvong, who joined the Viet Minh's revolt against the colonial French authorities in Indochina during the First Indochina War.
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Original: Muang Phuan or Xieng Khouang (Trấn Ninh -  Principality of Ninh  , historical Vietnamese name) was a historical principality on the Xiangkhoang Plateau, which constitutes the modern territory of Xiangkhouang Province, Laos.
Revised: Muang Phuan or Xieng Khouang (Trấn Ninh - ' Principality of Ninh , historical Vietnamese name) was a historical principality on the Xiangkhoang Plateau, which constitutes the modern territory of Xiangkhouang Province, Laos.
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Original: Muang Phuan or Xieng Khouang (Trấn Ninh -  Principality of Ninh  , historical Vietnamese name) was a historical principality on the Xiangkhoang Plateau, which constitutes the modern territory of Xiangkhouang Province, Laos.
Revised: Muang Phuan or Xieng Khouang (Trấn Ninh - Principality of Ninh ' , historical Vietnamese name) was a historical principality on the Xiangkhoang Plateau, which constitutes the modern territory of Xiangkhouang Province, Laos.
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Original:  Among the Lao, Phuan, and Thai muang has a dual meaning of “city” or more broadly “country of” and xieng means “walled.”
Revised:  Among the Lao, Phuan, and Thai muang has a dual meaning : 'city' or more broadly “country of” and xieng means “walled.”
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Original:  Among the Lao, Phuan, and Thai muang has a dual meaning of “city” or more broadly “country of” and xieng means “walled.”
Revised:  Among the Lao, Phuan, and Thai muang has a dual meaning of “city” or more broadly 'country of'. Xieng means 'walled'.
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Original:  The two terms were often used together for major city states under the Southeast Asian mandala model, thus Muang Xieng Khouang would be transcribed as the “Walled City / Country of the Phuan ” (Khouang is a French corruption of Phuan).
Revised:  The two terms were often used together for major city states under the Southeast Asian mandala model, thus Muang Xieng Khouang would be transcribed as the 'Walled city / Country of the Phuan ” (Khouang is a French corruption of Phuan).
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Original:  The two terms were often used together for major city states under the Southeast Asian mandala model, thus Muang Xieng Khouang would be transcribed as the “Walled City / Country of the Phuan ” (Khouang is a French corruption of Phuan).
Revised:  The two terms were often used together for major city states under the Southeast Asian mandala model, thus Muang Xieng Khouang would be transcribed as the “Walled City / country of the Phuan ” (Khouang is a French corruption of Phuan).
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Original:  The two terms were often used together for major city states under the Southeast Asian mandala model, thus Muang Xieng Khouang would be transcribed as the “Walled City / Country of the Phuan ” (Khouang is a French corruption of Phuan).
Revised:  The two terms were often used together for major city states under the Southeast Asian mandala model, thus Muang Xieng Khouang would be transcribed as the “Walled City / Country of the Phuan ' (Khouang is a French corruption of Phuan).
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Original: In epidemiology and biostatistics, the Experimental Event Rate (EER) is a measure of how often a particular statistical event (such as response to a drug, adverse event or death) occurs within the scientific control group of an experiment URL . Three statistical terms rely on EER for their calculation: Absolute risk reduction, Relative risk reduction and Number needed to treat.
Revised: In epidemiology and biostatistics, the experimental event rate (EER) is a measure of how often a particular statistical event (such as response to a drug, adverse event or death) occurs within the scientific control group of an experiment URL . Three statistical terms rely on EER for their calculation: Absolute risk reduction, Relative risk reduction and Number needed to treat.
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Original: In epidemiology and biostatistics, the Experimental Event Rate (EER) is a measure of how often a particular statistical event (such as response to a drug, adverse event or death) occurs within the scientific control group of an experiment URL . Three statistical terms rely on EER for their calculation: Absolute risk reduction, Relative risk reduction and Number needed to treat.
Revised: In epidemiology and biostatistics, the Experimental Event Rate (EER) is a measure of how often a particular statistical event (such as response to a drug, adverse event or death) occurs within the scientific control group of an experiment URL . Three statistical terms rely on EER for their calculation: absolute risk reduction, Relative risk reduction and Number needed to treat.
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Original: In epidemiology and biostatistics, the Experimental Event Rate (EER) is a measure of how often a particular statistical event (such as response to a drug, adverse event or death) occurs within the scientific control group of an experiment URL . Three statistical terms rely on EER for their calculation: Absolute risk reduction, Relative risk reduction and Number needed to treat.
Revised: In epidemiology and biostatistics, the Experimental Event Rate (EER) is a measure of how often a particular statistical event (such as response to a drug, adverse event or death) occurs within the scientific control group of an experiment URL . Three statistical terms rely on EER for their calculation: Absolute risk reduction, relative risk reduction and Number needed to treat.
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Original: In epidemiology and biostatistics, the Experimental Event Rate (EER) is a measure of how often a particular statistical event (such as response to a drug, adverse event or death) occurs within the scientific control group of an experiment URL . Three statistical terms rely on EER for their calculation: Absolute risk reduction, Relative risk reduction and Number needed to treat.
Revised: In epidemiology and biostatistics, the Experimental Event Rate (EER) is a measure of how often a particular statistical event (such as response to a drug, adverse event or death) occurs within the scientific control group of an experiment URL . Three statistical terms rely on EER for their calculation: Absolute risk reduction, Relative risk reduction and number needed to treat.
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Original:  Worked Example In a trial of hypothetical drug "X" where we are measuring event "Z", we have two groups.
Revised:  Worked example In a trial of hypothetical drug "X" where we are measuring event "Z", we have two groups.
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Original:  Event "Z" in experimental group : 12 in 25 people Experimental Event Rate : 12/25
Revised:  Event "Z" in experimental group : 12 in 25 people Experimental event rate : 12/25
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Original:  A satisfactory X does not exist only if PA + CB < PA - CA, or CA + CB < 0. But CA , CB >  0 by definition.
Revised:  A satisfactory X exist if PA + CB < PA - CA, or CA + CB < 0. But CA , CB > 0 by definition.
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Original:  A satisfactory X does not exist only if PA + CB < PA - CA, or CA + CB < 0. But CA , CB >  0 by definition.
Revised:  A satisfactory X does not exist only if PA + CB > PA - CA, or CA + CB < 0. But CA , CB > 0 by definition.
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Original:  A satisfactory X does not exist only if PA + CB < PA - CA, or CA + CB < 0. But CA , CB >  0 by definition.
Revised:  A satisfactory X does not exist only if PA + CB < PA - CA, or CA + CB > 0 by definition.
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Original: Self in Eastern traditions In spirituality, and especially nondual, mystical and eastern meditative traditions, the human being is often conceived as being in the illusion of individual existence, and separateness from other aspects of creation.
Revised: Self in Eastern traditions In spirituality, and especially nondual, mystical and eastern meditative traditions, the human being is often conceived as being an illusion of individual existence, and separateness from other aspects of creation.
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Original:  The ego is often associated with mind and the sense of time, which compulsively thinks in order to be assured of its future existence, rather than simply knowing its own self and the present. cn
Revised:  The ego is often associated with mind and the sense of time, which compulsively thinks in order to be assured of its future existence, rather than simply knowing its own self and the present. 
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Original:  The particular characteristics of the self determine its identity. 
Revised:  The particular characteristics of the self determine its identity. TIte
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Original:  The particular characteristics of the self determine its identity. TIte
Revised:  The particular characteristics of the self determine its identity. 
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Original: Definitions of the self Most philosophical definitions of self—per Descartes, Locke, Hume, and William James—are expressed in the first person.
Revised: Definitions of the self Most philosophical definitions of self—per Descartes, Locke, Hume, and William James—are bilat first person.
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Original: Isa Khan (c. 1529 – September 1599) was a Muslim Rajput- Bais Rajput zamindar who was one of the Baro Bhuiyans (twelve landlords) and a Zamindar of Khijirpur in 16th-century Bengal.
Revised: Isa Khan (c. 1529 – September 1599) was a Muslim Rajput- Bais Rajput zamindar who was one of the Baro Bhuiyans (twelve landlords) and a zamindar of Khijirpur in 16th-century Bengal.
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Original: Isa Khan (c. 1529 – September 1599) was a Muslim Rajput- Bais Rajput zamindar who was one of the Baro Bhuiyans (twelve landlords) and a Zamindar of the Bhati region in 16th-century Bengal.
Revised: Isa Khan (c. 1529 – September 1599) was a Muslim Rajput chieftain who led the Baro Bhuiyans (twelve landlords) and a Zamindar of the Bhati region in 16th-century Bengal.
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Original:  Later, under the guidance of the Sufi saint Danishmand, Gazdani converted to Islam and took new name Sulaiman Khan.
Revised:  Later, under the guidence of the Sufi saint Danishmand, Gazdani converted to Islam and took new name Sulaiman Khan.
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Original:  Death and legacy Khan died of natural causes  in September 1599.
Revised:  Death and legacy Khan died of natural causes Khan died there in September 1599.
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Original: Isa Khan (c. 1529 – September 1599) was a Muslim Rajput Bais Rajput zamindar who was one of the Baro Bhuiyans (twelve landlords) and a Zamindar of the Khijirpur in 16th-century Bengal.
Revised: Isa Khan (c. 1529 – September 1599) was a Muslim Rajput zamindar who was one of the Baro Bhuiyans (twelve landlords) and a Zamindar of the Khijirpur in 16th-century Bengal.
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Original:  Preiser and colleagues define POE as : the process of evaluating buildings in a systematic and rigorous manner after they have been built and occupied for some time"
Revised:  Preiser and colleagues define POE as " the process of evaluating buildings in a systematic and rigorous manner after they have been built and occupied for some time"
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Original:   The unique aspect of Post Occupancy Evaluation is that it generates recommendations based on all stakeholder groups' experiences of subject buildings' affects on productivity and wellbeing.
Revised:  . The unique aspect of Post Occupancy Evaluation is that it generates recommendations based on all stakeholder groups' experiences of subject buildings' affects on productivity and wellbeing.
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Original:  The method by which SPs are set for each runner varies in different countries but is generally by consensus of an appointed panel on the basis of their observations of the fluctuation in prices at  racetrack.
Revised:  The method by which SPs are set for each runner varies in different countries but is generally by consensus of an appointed panel on the basis of their observations of the fluctuation in prices at the racetrack.
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Original:     The principal function of a starting price is to determine returns on those winning bets where fixed odds have not been taken at the time the bet was struck.
Revised:  This is done as follows: The principal function of a starting price is to determine returns on those winning bets where fixed odds have not been taken at the time the bet was struck.
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Original: The Keats–Shelley Memorial Association, founded in 1903, supports the Keats-Shelley House in Rome which is a museum and library dedicated to the Romantic writers with a strong connection with Italy.
Revised: The Keats–Shelley Memorial Association, founded in 1903, supports the Keats–Shelley House in Rome which is a museum and library dedicated to the Romantic writers with a strong connection with Italy.
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Original: Reiman, D. H. (gen ed), The Bodleian Shelley Manuscripts (23 vols.), New York (1986–2002) Reiman, D. H. (gen ed), The Manuscripts of the Younger Romantics: Shelley (9 vols., 1985–97) Reiman, D. H. and Fraistat, N., (et al) The Complete Poetry of Percy Bysshe Shelley (3 vols.), 1999–2012, Baltimore, Johns Hopkins University Press Cameron, K. N. and Reiman, D. H. , (eds), Shelley and his Circle 1773–1822, Cambridge, Mass., 1961– (8 vols.)
Revised: Reiman, D. H. (gen ed), The Bodleian Shelley Manuscripts (23 vols.), New York (1986–2002) Reiman, D. H. (gen ed), The Manuscripts of the Younger Romantics: Shelley (9 vols., 1985–97) Reiman, D. H. and Fraistat, N., (et al) The Complete Poetry of Percy Bysshe Shelley (3 vols.), 1999–2012, Baltimore, Johns Hopkins University Press Cameron, K. N. and Reiman, D. H. (eds), Shelley and his Circle 1773–1822, Cambridge, Mass., 1961– (8 vols.)
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Original:  American literary critic Harold Bloom describes him as "a superb craftsman, a lyric poet without rival, and surely one of the most advanced sceptical intellects ever to write a poem."
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Original:   Shelley's critical reputation fluctuated in the 20th century, but in recent decades he has achieved increasing critical acclaim for the sweeping momentum of his poetic imagery, his mastery of genres and verse forms, and the complex interplay of sceptical, idealist, and materialist ideas in his work.
Revised:  Shelley's critical reputation fluctuated during the 20th century, but in recent decades he has achieved increasing critical acclaim for the sweeping momentum of his poetic imagery, his mastery of genres and verse forms, and the complex interplay of sceptical, idealist, and materialist ideas in his work.
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Original:  American literary critic Harold Bloom describes him as "a superb craftsman, a lyric poet without rival, and surely one of the most advanced sceptical intellects ever to write a poem."
Revised:  American literary critic Harold Bloom described him as "a superb craftsman, a lyric poet without rival, and surely one of the most advanced sceptical intellects ever to write a poem."
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Original:  In his last term  , his first novel Zastrozzi appeared and he had established a following among his fellow students.
Revised:  In his last term at Eton , his first novel Zastrozzi appeared and he had established a following among his fellow students.
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Original: Holmes, Richard, (1974), pp 43–47 Hogg was also an ardent Platonist.
Revised: Holmes, Richard, (1974), pp 43–47 
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Original:  By utilizing data assimilation techniques in combination with advanced computational models of the global ocean, researchers are able to interpolate the historical observations to all points in the ocean using the knowledge of physics that is embedded in the computational models .
Revised:  By utilizing data assimilation techniques in combination with advanced computational models of the global ocean, researchers are able to interpolate the historical observations to all points in the ocean .
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Original:  This process has an analog in the construction of atmospheric reanalyses and is closely related to ocean state estimation.
Revised:  This process has an analog in the construction of atmospheric reanalysis and is closely related to ocean state estimation.
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Original:  Current projects A number of efforts have been initiated in recent years to apply data assimilation to estimate the physical state of the ocean ( temperature, salinity, currents, sea level) in recent years.
Revised:  Current projects A number of efforts have been initiated in recent years to apply data assimilation to estimate the physical state of the ocean , including temperature, salinity, currents, sea level) in recent years.
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Original:  Current projects A number of efforts have been initiated in recent years to apply data assimilation to estimate the physical state of the ocean ( temperature, salinity, currents, sea level) in recent years.
Revised:  Current projects A number of efforts have been initiated in recent years to apply data assimilation to estimate the physical state of the ocean ( temperature, salinity, currents, and sea level, in recent years.
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Original:  Nine reanalysis efforts spanning multiple decades are described in.
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Original:  Among the nine there are three alternative state estimation approaches.
Revised:  There are three alternative state estimation approaches.
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Original:  The second approach is that of the sequential data assimilation analyses, which march forward in time from a previous analysis using a numerical simulation of the evolving temperature and other variables produced by an ocean general circulation model (data assimilation) .
Revised:  The second approach is that of the sequential data assimilation analyses, which move forward in time from a previous analysis using a numerical simulation of the evolving temperature and other variables produced by an ocean general circulation model (data assimilation) .
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Original:  The second approach is that of the sequential data assimilation analyses, which march forward in time from a previous analysis using a numerical simulation of the evolving temperature and other variables produced by an ocean general circulation model (data assimilation) .
Revised:  The second approach is that of the sequential data assimilation analyses, which march forward in time from a previous analysis using a numerical simulation of the evolving temperature and other variables produced by an ocean general circulation model .
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Original:  The simulation provides the first guess of the state of the ocean (temperature, salinity, etc.) at the next analysis time, while corrections are made to this first guess based on observations of variables such as temperature, salinity, or sea level.
Revised:  The simulation provides the first guess of the state of the ocean at the next analysis time, while corrections are made to this first guess based on observations of variables such as temperature, salinity, or sea level.
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Original:  Among the nine mentioned above INGV and SODA use versions of Optimal Interpolation.
Revised:  Among those mentioned above, INGV and SODA use versions of Optimal Interpolation.
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Original:  Dated May 24, 2006. has been applied to the Geophysical Fluid Dynamics Laboratory's (GFDL) Modular Ocean Model (MOM2) for a 7-year ocean reanalysis from January 1997-2004.
Revised:  Dated May 24, 2006. 
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Original:  Notes References URL URL External links List of existing ocean syntheses at ICDC 
Revised:  References URL URL External links List of existing ocean syntheses at ICDC 
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Original:  Notes References URL URL External links List of existing ocean syntheses at ICDC 
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Original:  "To date we are unaware of any attempt to use Kalman Filter for multi-decadal ocean reanalyses." Carton, J.A., and A. Santorelli, 2008: Global upper ocean heat content as viewed in nine analyses, J. Clim., 21, 6015–6035.
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Original:  The 4-Dimensional Local Ensemble Transform Kalman Filter (4D-LETKF) has been applied to the Geophysical Fluid Dynamics Laboratory's (GFDL) Modular Ocean Model (MOM2) for a 7-year ocean reanalysis from January 1997-2004.
Revised:  The 4-Dimensional Local Ensemble Transform Kalman Filter (4D-LETKF) has been applied to the Geophysical Fluid Dynamics Laboratory's (GFDL) Modular Ocean Model (MOM2) for a 7-year ocean reanalysis from January 1997 – 2004.
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Original:  References See also Meteorological reanalysis 
Revised:  See also Meteorological reanalysis 
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Original:  References See also Meteorological reanalysis 
Revised:  References See also Meteorological reanalysis References
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Original: Jan Adriaan Strauss (born 18 November 1985 in Bloemfontein, South Africa ) is a former rugby union player that played first class rugby between 2005 and 2018.
Revised: Jan Adriaan Strauss (born 18 November 1985 ) is a former rugby union player that played first class rugby between 2005 and 2018.
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Original: Jan Adriaan Strauss (born 18 November 1985 in Bloemfontein, South Africa ) is a former rugby union player that played first class rugby between 2005 and 2018.
Revised: Jan Adriaan Strauss (born 18 November 1985 in Bloemfontein, South Africa ) is a South African former professional rugby union player that played first class rugby between 2005 and 2018.
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Original:   Herophilus wrote a manual for midwives, an advance for midwifery's status.
Revised:  Herophilus wrote a manual for midwives, which advanced their status.
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Original:  Soranus of Ephesus states that for a woman to be an eligible midwife she must be Soranus of Ephesus (98-138 AD) was an important gynecologist during antiquity and is credited with four books describing the female anatomy.
Revised:  Soranus was an important gynecologist during antiquity and is credited with four books describing the female anatomy.
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Original:  Soranus of Ephesus states that for a woman to be an eligible midwife she must be Soranus of Ephesus (98-138 AD) was an important gynecologist during antiquity and is credited with four books describing the female anatomy.
Revised:  Soranus of Ephesus states that for a woman to be an eligible midwife she must be Soranus of Ephesus (98-138 AD) was an important gynecologist and is credited with four books describing the female anatomy.
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