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Original:  The show's tagline, "I 'm not a number, I 'm a free man!" emphasised the primary focus of the series, McGoohan's escape from his captor, "Number One".
Revised:  The show's tagline, "I am not a number, I 'm a free man!" emphasised the primary focus of the series, McGoohan's escape from his captor, "Number One".
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Original:  The show's tagline, "I 'm not a number, I 'm a free man!" emphasised the primary focus of the series, McGoohan's escape from his captor, "Number One".
Revised:  The show's tagline, "I 'm not a number, I am a free man!" emphasised the primary focus of the series, McGoohan's escape from his captor, "Number One".
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Original: It is however, for the series "The Prisoner", filmed in Portmeirion, North Wales, that He will be best remembered.
Revised: It is for the series "The Prisoner", filmed in Portmeirion, North Wales, that He will be best remembered.
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Original: It is however, for the series "The Prisoner", filmed in Portmeirion, North Wales, that He will be best remembered.
Revised: It is however, for the series "The Prisoner", filmed in Portmeirion, North Wales, that he will be best remembered.
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Original: Double Emmy award winning US Actor , Patrick McGoohan, famed for his role as number 6 in the 1960's cult British television series The Prisoner, died Tuesday at St John's Health Center, Santa Monica, CA.  following a short illness .
Revised: Double Emmy award winning US Actor , Patrick McGoohan, famed for his role as number 6 in the 1960's cult British television series The Prisoner, died Tuesday at the Saint John's Health Center, Santa Monica, CA. following a short illness .
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Original: Double Emmy award winning US Actor , Patrick McGoohan, famed for his role as number 6 in the 1960's cult British television series The Prisoner, died Tuesday at St John's Health Center, Santa Monica, CA.  following a short illness .
Revised: Double Emmy award winning US Actor , Patrick McGoohan, famed for his role as number 6 in the 1960's cult British television series The Prisoner, died Tuesday at St John's Health Center, Santa Monica, California. following a short illness .
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Original:  Born in New York  , and raised in the UK and Ireland, the actor played in numerous series on both continents.
Revised:  Born in New York City , and raised in the UK and Ireland, the actor played in numerous series on both continents.
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Original:  Aside from The Prisoner, his notable roles were in the ITV network series "Armchair Theatre " and Danger Man.
Revised:  Aside from The Prisoner, his notable roles were in the ITV network series Armchair Theatre and Danger Man.
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Original:  McGoohan was also considered for the role of  James Bond.
Revised:  McGoohan was also considered for the role of the iconic spy James Bond.
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Original:  It is for the series "The Prisoner" , filmed in Portmeirion, North Wales, that he will be best remembered.
Revised:  It is for the series The Prisoner , filmed in Portmeirion, North Wales, that he will be best remembered.
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Original:  McGoohan leaves a widow, Joan Drummond McGoohan, 3 Daughters, 5 grandchildren (Sarah, Erin, Simon, Nina, and Paddy) and 1 great-grandchild , Jack Lockhart
Revised:  McGoohan leaves behind his wife Joan Drummond McGoohan, 3 Daughters, 5 grandchildren (Sarah, Erin, Simon, Nina, and Paddy) and 1 great-grandchild , Jack Lockhart
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Original:  McGoohan leaves a widow, Joan Drummond McGoohan, 3 Daughters, 5 grandchildren (Sarah, Erin, Simon, Nina, and Paddy) and 1 great-grandchild , Jack Lockhart
Revised:  McGoohan leaves a widow, Joan Drummond McGoohan, three daughters, five grandchildren and one great-grandchild , Jack Lockhart
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Original:  McGoohan leaves a widow, Joan Drummond McGoohan, 3 Daughters, 5 grandchildren (Sarah, Erin, Simon, Nina, and Paddy) and 1 great-grandchild , Jack Lockhart
Revised:  McGoohan leaves a widow, Joan Drummond McGoohan, 3 Daughters, 5 grandchildren (Sarah, Erin, Simon, Nina, and Paddy) and 1 great-grandchild 
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Original: Two-time Emmy Award-winning American-born actor, Patrick McGoohan, famed for his role as Number Six in the 1960s cult British television series The Prisoner, has died at the Saint John's Health Center, Santa Monica, California.
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Original:  He died on January 13, following a short illness at the age of 80. McGoohan's death was made public by his son-in-law, film producer Cleve Landsberg.
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Original:  Burris was denied his position on January 6 by other Democratic members of the Congress because his appointment papers were not signed Jesse White, the Illinois Secretary of State, who had refused to sign his name due to Blagojevich's accusations . Burris was officially sworn in by United States Vice President Dick Cheney with no objections from other members of the Congress.
Revised:  Burris was denied his position on January 6 by other Democratic members of the Congress because his appointment papers were not signed Jesse White, the Illinois Secretary of State, who had refused to sign his name due to the charges faced by Blagojevich . Burris was officially sworn in by United States Vice President Dick Cheney with no objections from other members of the Congress.
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Original:  Even Harry Reid, a Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate, stating to Burris “ On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend. ”
Revised:  Harry Reid, a Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate, stating to Burris “ On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend. ”
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Original:  Even Harry Reid, a Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate, stating to Burris “ On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend. ”
Revised:  Even Harry Reid, the Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate, stating to Burris “ On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend. ”
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Original:  Even Harry Reid, a Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate, stating to Burris “ On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend. ”
Revised:  Even Harry Reid, a Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate, stating to Burris : " On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend. ”
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Original:  Even Harry Reid, a Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate, stating to Burris “ On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend. ”
Revised:  Even Harry Reid, a Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate, stating to Burris “ On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend. "
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Original:  Burris was denied his position on January 6 by other Democratic members of the Congress because his appointment papers were not signed  Jesse White, the Illinois Secretary of State, who had refused to sign his name due to the charges faced by Blagojevich.
Revised:  Burris was denied his position on January 6 by other Democratic members of the Congress because his appointment papers were not signed by Jesse White, the Illinois Secretary of State, who had refused to sign his name due to the charges faced by Blagojevich.
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Original:  Harry Reid, the  Democratic Senator from Nevada  who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate , stating to Burris: "On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend . " 
Revised:  Harry Reid, the senior Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate , stating to Burris: "On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend . " 
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Original:  Harry Reid, the  Democratic Senator from Nevada  who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate , stating to Burris: "On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend . " 
Revised:  Harry Reid, the Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate . "On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend . " 
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Original:  Harry Reid, the  Democratic Senator from Nevada  who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate , stating to Burris: "On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend . " 
Revised:  Harry Reid, the Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate , stating to Burris: "On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend , " 
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Original:  Harry Reid, the  Democratic Senator from Nevada  who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate , stating to Burris: "On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend . " 
Revised:  Harry Reid, the Democratic Senator from Nevada who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate , stating to Burris: "On behalf of all senators, Democrats and Republicans, we welcome you as a colleague and a friend . " Reid said.
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Original:  This makes the count of Democrats to Republicans in the Senate 58 Democrats and 41 Republicans  
Revised:  This makes the count of Democrats to Republicans in the Senate 58 Democrats and 41 Republicans . 
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Original: Burris was not originally admitted to the Senateeven though he was named to the position because Illinois governor Rod Blagojevich was accused of selling the positionand later arrested and impeached for the alleged crime.
Revised: Burris was initially not admitted into the Senate, even though Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich appointed him to the position, due to allegations that the Governor tried to sell the seat. Blagojevich was arrested and has been impeached for the alleged crime.
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Original: Burris was initially not admitted into the Senate, even though Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich appointed him to the position, due to allegations that the Governor tried to sell the seat.
Revised: Burris was initially not admitted into the Senate, even though Governor of IllinoisRod Blagojevich appointed him to the position, due to allegations that the Governor tried to sell the seat.
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Original: Burris was initially not admitted into the Senate, even though Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich appointed him to the position, due to allegations that the Governor tried to sell the seat.
Revised: Burris was initially not admitted into the Senate, even though Illinois Governor Rod Blagojevich appointed him to the position, due to allegations that the governor tried to sell the seat.
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Original:  Harry Reid, the senior Democratic Senator from Nevada and majority leader, who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate.
Revised:  Harry Reid, the senior Democratic senator from Nevada and majority leader, who had led the opposition to Burris being appointed, welcomed him into the Senate.
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Original:  Most other comments by Senators stated that they were not against Burris as a person, but were against his appointment by Rod Blagojevich.
Revised:  Most other comments by senators stated that they were not against Burris as a person, but were against his appointment by Rod Blagojevich.
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Original:  Burris was initially not admitted into the Senate, even though Governor of IllinoisRod Blagojevich appointed him to the position, due to allegations that the governor tried to sell the seat.
Revised:  Roland Burris. Burris was initially not admitted into the Senate, even though Governor of IllinoisRod Blagojevich appointed him to the position, due to allegations that the governor tried to sell the seat.
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Original:  Burris was initially not admitted into the Senate, even though Governor of IllinoisRod Blagojevich appointed him to the position, due to allegations that the governor tried to sell the seat.
Revised:  Burris was initially not admitted into the Senate, even though Governor of Illinois Rod Blagojevich appointed him to the position, due to allegations that the governor tried to sell the seat.
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Original:  In his recent audio tape , bin Laden promised the president-elect that al-Qa'ida would open new fronts against the USA.
Revised:  In a recent audio tape , bin Laden promised the president-elect that al-Qa'ida would open new fronts against the USA.
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Original:  In his recent audio tape , bin Laden promised the president-elect that al-Qa'ida would open new fronts against the USA.
Revised:  In his recent audio tape attributed to bin Laden, the al-Qa'ida leader promised the president-elect that al-Qa'ida would open new fronts against the USA.
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Original:  If he (Obama) withdraws from the war, that would be a military defeat, and if he goes on with it, he'll drown in economic crisis," he said Current Vice President Dick Cheney has been quoted as saying he wants to capture bi Laden before leaving office.
Revised:  If he (Obama) withdraws from the war, that would be a military defeat, and if he goes on with it, he'll drown in economic crisis," he said Current Vice President Dick Cheney has been quoted as saying he wants to capture bin Laden before leaving office.
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Original:  He also cited the containment of al-Qa'ida as a major achievment of the past seven years.
Revised:  He also cited the containment of al-Qa'ida as a major achievement of the past seven years.
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Original:   The worst heritage is when a man inherits a long guerrilla warfare with a persevering, patient enemy - a war that is funded by usury.
Revised:  " The worst heritage is when a man inherits a long guerrilla warfare with a persevering, patient enemy - a war that is funded by usury.
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Original:  If he (Obama) withdraws from the war, that would be a military defeat, and if he goes on with it, he'll drown in economic crisis," he said 
Revised:  If he (Obama) withdraws from the war, that would be a military defeat, and if he goes on with it, he'll drown in economic crisis," he said .
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Original:  "We have to so weaken ( bin Laden's ) infrastructure that, whether he is technically alive or not, he is so pinned down that he cannot function and I'm confident that we can keep them on the run and ensure that they cannot train terrorists to attack our homeland."
Revised:  "We have to so weaken bin Laden's ) infrastructure that, whether he is technically alive or not, he is so pinned down that he cannot function and I'm confident that we can keep them on the run and ensure that they cannot train terrorists to attack our homeland."
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Original:  "We have to so weaken ( bin Laden's ) infrastructure that, whether he is technically alive or not, he is so pinned down that he cannot function and I'm confident that we can keep them on the run and ensure that they cannot train terrorists to attack our homeland."
Revised:  "We have to so weaken ( bin Laden's infrastructure that, whether he is technically alive or not, he is so pinned down that he cannot function and I'm confident that we can keep them on the run and ensure that they cannot train terrorists to attack our homeland."
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Original:  In a recent audio tape attributed to bin Laden, the al-Qa'ida leader promised the president-elect that al-Qa'ida would open new fronts against the USA. "The worst heritage is when a man inherits a long guerrilla warfare with a persevering, patient enemy - a war that is funded by usury.
Revised:  In a recent audio tape attributed to bin Laden, the al-Qaeda leader promised the president-elect that al-Qa'ida would open new fronts against the USA. "The worst heritage is when a man inherits a long guerrilla warfare with a persevering, patient enemy - a war that is funded by usury.
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Original:  In a recent audio tape attributed to bin Laden, the al-Qa'ida leader promised the president-elect that al-Qa'ida would open new fronts against the USA. "The worst heritage is when a man inherits a long guerrilla warfare with a persevering, patient enemy - a war that is funded by usury.
Revised:  In a recent audio tape attributed to bin Laden, the al-Qa'ida leader promised the president-elect that al-Qaeda would open new fronts against the USA. "The worst heritage is when a man inherits a long guerrilla warfare with a persevering, patient enemy - a war that is funded by usury.
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Original:  If he (Obama) withdraws from the war, that would be a military defeat, and if he goes on with it, he'll drown in economic crisis," he said.
Revised:  If he Obama withdraws from the war, that would be a military defeat, and if he goes on with it, he'll drown in economic crisis," he said.
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Original:  The important thing was to go after the organization, after al-Qa'ida .
Revised:  The important thing was to go after the organization, after al-Qaeda .
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Original: 250px|A cigarette 22 million counterfeit cigarettes have been found in Cardiff, Wales by officials working for HM Revenue & Customs  .
Revised: 250px|A cigarette 22 million counterfeit cigarettes have been found in Cardiff, Wales by officials working for HM Revenue & Customs (HMRC) .
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Original:  They had an estimated value of five million GBP and impersonated the Classic Gold and Raquel brands of cigarette     
Revised:  They had an estimated value of five million GBP and impersonated the Classic Gold and Raquel brands of cigarette . 
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Original:  They had an estimated value of five million GBP and impersonated the Classic Gold and Raquel brands of cigarette     
Revised:  They had an estimated value of five million GBP and impersonated the Classic Gold and Raquel brands of cigarette "Had it been successful, it would have undermined the business of honest traders who only sell duty paid tobacco products," he continued. "The sheer quantity involved in this attempt suggests these cigarettes could have ended up in locations across the UK." 
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Original:  They had an estimated value of five million GBP and impersonated the Classic Gold and Raquel brands of cigarette     
Revised:  They had an estimated value of five million GBP and impersonated the Classic Gold and Raquel brands of cigarette "Had it been successful, it would have undermined the business of honest traders who only sell duty-paid tobacco products.
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Original: " Had it been successful, it would have undermined the business of honest traders who only sell duty-paid tobacco products.
Revised: " 
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Original:  " The sheer quantity involved in this attempt suggests these cigarettes could have ended up in locations across the UK," he stated.
Revised:  " 
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Original:  " Had it been successful, it would have undermined the business of honest traders who only sell duty paid tobacco products," he continued.
Revised:  Had it been successful, it would have undermined the business of honest traders who only sell duty paid tobacco products," he continued.
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Original: Nearly 1, 2000 Palestinians have been killed as a result of the Israeli offensive into Gaza . nearly 400 of those killed have been children.
Revised: Nearly 1, 2000 Palestinians have been killed as a result of the Israeli offensive into Gaza , and more than 400 of those killed have been children.
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Original:  Israel  began its offensive in order to stop rockets that Hamas was firing into Israel.
Revised:  Israel claims it began its offensive in order to stop rockets that Hamas was firing into Israel.
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Original: U.N. spokesman Chris Gunness says they "condemn " the attack and call for an investigation into possible war crimes.
Revised: U.N. spokesman Chris Gunness says they condemn the attack and call for an investigation into possible war crimes.
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Original:  This call by Senators has also earned the support of president-elect Barack Obama, who be inaugurated on Tuesday  
Revised:  This call by Senators has also earned the support of president-elect Barack Obama, who be inaugurated on Tuesday . 
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Original:  Currently, approximately 2 million Americans are on a waiting list to receive coupons for these digital converter boxes  
Revised:  Currently, approximately 2 million Americans are on a waiting list to receive coupons for these digital converter boxes . 
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Original:  Unfortunately, after guarantees that the Bush administration would adequately prepare and protect consumers, only in the last few days have they revealed that funding has run out— just weeks before the plug is pulled on analog TV."" said US Senator Amy Klobuchar, from Minnesota and of the Unite States Democratic Party.
Revised:  Unfortunately, after guarantees that the Bush administration would adequately prepare and protect consumers, only in the last few days have they revealed that funding has run out— just weeks before the plug is pulled on analog TV."" said US Senator Amy Klobuchar, from Minnesota and of the United States Democratic Party.
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Original:  Unfortunately, after guarantees that the Bush administration would adequately prepare and protect consumers, only in the last few days have they revealed that funding has run out— just weeks before the plug is pulled on analog TV." " said US Senator Amy Klobuchar, from Minnesota and of the United States Democratic Party.
Revised:  Unfortunately, after guarantees that the Bush administration would adequately prepare and protect consumers, only in the last few days have they revealed that funding has run out— just weeks before the plug is pulled on analog TV." said US Senator Amy Klobuchar, from Minnesota and of the United States Democratic Party.
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Original:  Unfortunately, after guarantees that the Bush administration would adequately prepare and protect consumers, only in the last few days have they revealed that funding has run out— just weeks before the plug is pulled on analog TV." said US Senator Amy Klobuchar, from Minnesota and of the United States Democratic Party .
Revised:  Unfortunately, after guarantees that the Bush administration would adequately prepare and protect consumers, only in the last few days have they revealed that funding has run out— just weeks before the plug is pulled on analog TV." said US Senator Amy Klobuchar, from Minnesota .
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Original:  Senator John Rockefeller, also a Democrat and from the state of West Virginia, also led the charge for the bill to be passed.
Revised:  Senator John Rockefeller, from the state of West Virginia, also led the charge for the bill to be passed.
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