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Original:  Class 8 Land Yachts : kite buggying or parakarting, differ from other classes in that the sail is replaced with a large traction kite, usually flown on 20–40 m quad lines.
Revised:  Class 8 land yachts : kite buggying or parakarting, differ from other classes in that the sail is replaced with a large traction kite, usually flown on 20–40 m quad lines.
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Original:  Class 8 activities are generally grouped under  racing, using large kites and very large and heavy buggies:
Revised:  Class 8 activities are generally grouped under : racing, using large kites and very large and heavy buggies:
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Original:  the current speed record is by Brian Holgate on the 6th March 2012 at dry Ivanpah Lake, Nevada. freestyle where smaller, lighter machines perform freestyle tricks such as airs, spins, wheelies, reverse flying, etc. endurance or cruising , the 24 hour Distance Record is 623 km by New Zealander Peter Foulkes, where long distances are covered in trips lasting several days :
Revised:  the current speed record is by Brian Holgate on the 6th March 2012 at dry Ivanpah Lake, Nevada. freestyle where smaller, lighter machines perform freestyle tricks such as airs, spins, wheelies, reverse flying, etc. endurance or cruising : the 24 hour Distance Record is 623 km by New Zealander Peter Foulkes, where long distances are covered in trips lasting several days :
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Original:  the current speed record is by Brian Holgate on the 6th March 2012 at dry Ivanpah Lake, Nevada. freestyle where smaller, lighter machines perform freestyle tricks such as airs, spins, wheelies, reverse flying, etc. endurance or cruising , the 24 hour Distance Record is 623 km by New Zealander Peter Foulkes, where long distances are covered in trips lasting several days :
Revised:  the current speed record is by Brian Holgate on the 6th March 2012 at dry Ivanpah Lake, Nevada. freestyle where smaller, lighter machines perform freestyle tricks such as airs, spins, wheelies, reverse flying, etc. endurance or cruising , the 24 hour distance record is 623 km by New Zealander Peter Foulkes, where long distances are covered in trips lasting several days :
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Original:  The host and venue of this regatta rotates, and the 2009 event will be hosted by NALSA at the March regatta.
Revised:  The host and venue of this regatta rotates, and the 2009 event was to be hosted by NALSA at the March regatta.
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Original:   Blokart racing is a sport administered by the International Blokart Racing Association (IBRA)  who sanction events and set the international racing rules.
Revised:  Blokart racing is a sport administered by the International Blokart Racing Association (IBRA) ,International Blokart Racing Association (IBRA) who sanction events and set the international racing rules.
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Original:   Blokart World Championships have been held biennially since the inaugural event at the home of Blokart in Papamoa, NZ in 2008.
Revised:  rules Blokart World Championships have been held biennially since the inaugural event at the home of Blokart in Papamoa, NZ in 2008.
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Original:   Blokart World Championships have been held biennially since the inaugural event at the home of Blokart in Papamoa, NZ in 2008.
Revised:  Blokart World Championships have been held biennially since the inaugural event at the home of Blokart in Papamoa, New Zealand in 2008.
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Original:  The Blokart Worlds  event has been since held in Ostend, Belgium;
Revised:  The Blokart Worlds eventThe Blokart Worlds event has been since held in Ostend, Belgium;
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Original:  Ivanpah, California, USA and Perth Australia.
Revised:  Ivanpah, California, US; and Perth, Australia.
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Original:  Many dry lakes in the western United States (Ivanpah, El Mirage and the Black Rock Desert are the most popular.) Beaches in New Zealand, with 90 Mile Beach, Auckland’s west coast beaches, Waikanae, New Brighton, Rabbit Island, and Oreti, being popular . Blokart Heaven– a purpose built track in Papamoa, New Zealand . Salt pans such as Lake Lefroy (near Kambalda), and some beaches in Australia.
Revised:  Many dry lakes in the western United States (Ivanpah, El Mirage and the Black Rock Desert are the most popular.) Beaches in New Zealand, with 90 Mile Beach, Auckland’s west coast beaches, Waikanae, New Brighton, Rabbit Island, and Oreti, being popular Blokart Heaven, a purpose built track in Papamoa, New Zealand . Salt pans such as Lake Lefroy (near Kambalda), and some beaches in Australia.
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Original:  Many dry lakes in the western United States (Ivanpah, El Mirage and the Black Rock Desert are the most popular.) Beaches in New Zealand, with 90 Mile Beach, Auckland’s west coast beaches, Waikanae, New Brighton, Rabbit Island, and Oreti, being popular . Blokart Heaven– a purpose built track in Papamoa, New Zealand . Salt pans such as Lake Lefroy (near Kambalda), and some beaches in Australia.
Revised:  Many dry lakes in the western United States (Ivanpah, El Mirage and the Black Rock Desert are the most popular.) Beaches in New Zealand, with 90 Mile Beach, Auckland’s west coast beaches, Waikanae, New Brighton, Rabbit Island, and Oreti, being popular . Blokart Heaven– a purpose built track in Papamoa, New Zealand Salt pans such as Lake Lefroy (near Kambalda), and some beaches in Australia.
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Original:  Beaches in Cádiz, Spain California dry lakes .
Revised:  Beaches in Cádiz, Spain California dry lakes ;
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Original:  El Mirage near Adelanto, Ivanpah near Primm, NV Beaches in Argentina Pampa del leoncito Argentina Playa La Punta, Isla de Coche, Venezuela Punta Banda, [Ensenada], Baja California, Mexico— Five mile sand beach Salinas El Convento Chile Beaches and airfields in Lithuania Wijk aan Zee in the Netherlands Vortex Wind Karting – a purpose built track outside sunny Nelson, New Zealand .
Revised:  El Mirage near Adelanto, Ivanpah near Primm, Nevada Beaches in Argentina Pampa del leoncito Argentina Playa La Punta, Isla de Coche, Venezuela Punta Banda, [Ensenada], Baja California, Mexico— Five mile sand beach Salinas El Convento Chile Beaches and airfields in Lithuania Wijk aan Zee in the Netherlands Vortex Wind Karting – a purpose built track outside sunny Nelson, New Zealand .
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Original:  El Mirage near Adelanto, Ivanpah near Primm, NV Beaches in Argentina Pampa del leoncito Argentina Playa La Punta, Isla de Coche, Venezuela Punta Banda, [Ensenada], Baja California, Mexico— Five mile sand beach Salinas El Convento Chile Beaches and airfields in Lithuania Wijk aan Zee in the Netherlands Vortex Wind Karting – a purpose built track outside sunny Nelson, New Zealand .
Revised:  El Mirage near Adelanto, Ivanpah near Primm, NV Beaches in Argentina Pampa del leoncito Argentina Playa La Punta, Isla de Coche, Venezuela Punta Banda, [Ensenada], Baja California, Mexico— five mile sand beach Salinas El Convento Chile Beaches and airfields in Lithuania Wijk aan Zee in the Netherlands Vortex Wind Karting – a purpose built track outside sunny Nelson, New Zealand .
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Original:  El Mirage near Adelanto, Ivanpah near Primm, NV Beaches in Argentina Pampa del leoncito Argentina Playa La Punta, Isla de Coche, Venezuela Punta Banda, [Ensenada], Baja California, Mexico— Five mile sand beach Salinas El Convento Chile Beaches and airfields in Lithuania Wijk aan Zee in the Netherlands Vortex Wind Karting – a purpose built track outside sunny Nelson, New Zealand .
Revised:  El Mirage near Adelanto, Ivanpah near Primm, NV Beaches in Argentina Pampa del leoncito Argentina Playa La Punta, Isla de Coche, Venezuela Punta Banda, [Ensenada], Baja California, Mexico— Five mile sand beach Salinas El Convento Chile Beaches and airfields in Lithuania Wijk aan Zee in the Netherlands Vortex Wind Karting – a purpose built track outside Nelson, New Zealand .
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Original:  El Mirage near Adelanto, Ivanpah near Primm, NV Beaches in Argentina Pampa del leoncito Argentina Playa La Punta, Isla de Coche, Venezuela Punta Banda, [Ensenada], Baja California, Mexico— Five mile sand beach Salinas El Convento Chile Beaches and airfields in Lithuania Wijk aan Zee in the Netherlands Vortex Wind Karting – a purpose built track outside sunny Nelson, New Zealand .
Revised:  El Mirage near Adelanto, Ivanpah near Primm, NV Beaches in Argentina Pampa del leoncito Argentina Playa La Punta, Isla de Coche, Venezuela Punta Banda, [Ensenada], Baja California, Mexico— Five mile sand beach Salinas El Convento Chile Beaches and airfields in Lithuania Wijk aan Zee in the Netherlands Vortex Wind Karting – a purpose built track outside sunny Nelson, New Zealand 
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Original:  These yachts are very usable and they are a truly fun inexpensive class for all the family popular in Europe, America, Australia, New Zealand, UK and Ireland.
Revised:  These yachts are popular in Europe, America, Australia, New Zealand, UK and Ireland.
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Original:  The hill of Phnom Da contains an 11th Century temple that is still standing. sevsevsvsvvsevsevsevsev
Revised:  The hill of Phnom Da contains an 11th Century temple that is still standing. 
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Original:  Among its provisions were the abolition of the Council of State and the establishment of a federal national structure due to administrative and political provincial decentralization.
Revised:  Among its provisions was the establishment of a federal national structure due to administrative and political provincial decentralization.
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Original:  Among its provisions were the abolition of the Council of State and the establishment of a federal national structure due to administrative and political provincial decentralization.
Revised:  Among its provisions were the abolition of the Council of State and the establishment of a quasi-federal national structure due to administrative and political provincial decentralization.
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Original:  [[Image:Independência ou Morte (1888).jpg|alt= A painting depicting a group of uniformed men on horseback riding towards a smaller group of mounted men who have halted at the top of a small hill with the uniformed man at the front of the smaller group raising a sword high into the air|Declaration of Brazil's independence by Prince Pedro on 7 September 1822.
Revised:  [[Image:Independência ou Morte (1888).jpg|alt= painting depicting a group of uniformed men on horseback riding towards a smaller group of mounted men who have halted at the top of a small hill with the uniformed man at the front of the smaller group raising a sword high into the air|Declaration of Brazil's independence by Prince Pedro on 7 September 1822.
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Original: Barman (1999), p .124 – Vasconcelos did not lose all political influence he once had, since by the end of the 1840s he was still a powerful figure in politics who opposed the end of African slaves' import but he never became a minister again until his death in 1850.
Revised: Barman (1999), p . 124 – Vasconcelos did not lose all political influence he once had, since by the end of the 1840s he was still a powerful figure in politics who opposed the end of African slaves' import but he never became a minister again until his death in 1850.
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Original:  Nosherwan Wadia worked in the Bombay, Baroda and Central Indian Railways . Young Wadia received his early schooling in a private school at Surat and later at Sir J. J. English School before the family moved to Baroda in 1894 where he went to Baroda High School.
Revised:  Nosherwan Wadia worked in the Bombay, Baroda and Central India . Young Wadia received his early schooling in a private school at Surat and later at Sir J. J. English School before the family moved to Baroda in 1894 where he went to Baroda High School.
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Original:  Their daughter however died in infancy.
Revised:  They had a daughter who died in infancy.
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Original: Technique Dreyer has outlined the technique to ChiRunning as follows: "focus your mind", "sense your body", " breath to tap into Chi", "relax your muscles", "practice good posture", and "start slow".
Revised: Technique Dreyer has outlined the technique to ChiRunning as follows: "focus your mind", "sense your body", " breathe to tap into Chi", "relax your muscles", "practice good posture", and "start slow".
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Original:  Partnered with New Balance, Dreyer helped design a running shoe that was released in 2008 for runners that utilize a midfoot strike.
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Original: Martha McCaughey , PhD, (born October 25, 1966) is an American academic and author.
Revised: Martha McCaughey (born October 25, 1966) is an American academic and author.
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Original:  She is the director of Women's Studies at Appalachian State University  .
Revised:  She was the director of Women's Studies at Appalachian State University .
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Original:  Her most recent book is The Caveman Mystique: Pop-Darwinism and the Debates over Sex, Violence, and Science (2008, Routledge)  .
Revised:  She is the author of The Caveman Mystique: Pop-Darwinism and the Debates over Sex, Violence, and Science (2008, Routledge) .
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Original: Writings Among her writings are two similarly titled books: Real Knockouts: the Physical Feminism of Women’s Self-Defense () in 1997 and Reel Knockouts: Violent Women in the Movies (), which she co-edited in 2001 with Neal King.
Revised: Writings Among McCaughey's writings are two similarly titled books: Real Knockouts: the Physical Feminism of Women’s Self-Defense () in 1997 and Reel Knockouts: Violent Women in the Movies (), which she co-edited in 2001 with Neal King.
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Original:   References
Revised:  Most recently, McCaughey has written a number of essays on feminism, academic freedom, and the purpose of the university. References
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Original:  1916 – 21 March 2009) was the wife of Ruhollah Khomeini, the leader of the 1979 Iranian Revolution.
Revised:  1913 – 21 March 2009) was the wife of Ruhollah Khomeini, the leader of the 1979 Iranian Revolution.
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Original: Khadijeh Saqafi ( , nicknamed Quds of Iran ;
Revised: Khadijeh Saqafi ( ;
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Original:  Her son , Mostafa , died in Iraq in 1977 , while a second son , Ahmad , died of a cardiac arrest in 1995 at the age of 49.
Revised:  Her son , Mostafa , died in Iraq in 1977 , while a second son , Ahmad , died of a cardiac arrest in 1995.
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Original:  Saqafi, who largely stayed out of the Iranian public 's eye, has been described as a strong supporter of her husband's opposition to the Shahof Iran.
Revised:  Throughout their marriage, Saqafi largely stayed out of the Iranian public 's eye, has been described as a strong supporter of her husband's opposition to the Shahof Iran.
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Original:  Saqafi, who largely stayed out of the Iranian public 's eye, has been described as a strong supporter of her husband's opposition to the Shahof Iran.
Revised:  Saqafi, who largely stayed out of the public eye, although she was described as being a strong supporter of her husband's opposition to the Shahof Iran.
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Original:  Former President of Iran Akbar Hashemi Rafsanjani,  referred to Saqafi as the "closest and most patient" supporter for her husband.
Revised:  Former President of Iran Akbar Hashemi Rafsanjani, referred to Saqafi as the "closest and most patient" supporter of her husband.
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Original:  " Death Saqafi died  on 21 March 2009 , in Tehran after a long illness at the age of 93.
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Original:  " Death Saqafi died  on 21 March 2009 , in Tehran after a long illness at the age of 93.
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Original:  " Death Saqafi died  on 21 March 2009 , in Tehran after a long illness at the age of 93.
Revised:  " Death Saqafi died on 21 March 2009 at the age of 93.
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Original:  Thousands of people attended her funeral , including the Supreme Leader of Iran Ali Khamenei and then President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad.
Revised:  Thousands of people attended her funeral , including the Supreme Leader of Iran Ali Khamenei and then-President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad.
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Original:  Saqafi was buried next to her husband at his Mausoleum in Behesht-e Zahra.
Revised:  Saqafi was buried next to her husband at his mausoleum in Behesht-e Zahra.
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Original:  She was survived by her three daughters , Zahra, Sadiqeh, and Farideh.
Revised:  She was survived by her three daughters Zahra, Sadiqeh, and Farideh.
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Original:  From 1850 to 1886, Geronimo joined with members of three other Chiricahua Apache bands—the Tchihende, the Tsokanende and the Nednhi—to carry out numerous raids, as well as fight against Mexican and U.S. military campaigns in the northern Mexico states of Chihuahua and Sonora and in the southwestern American territories of New Mexico and Arizona.
Revised:  From 1850 to 1886, Geronimo joined with members of three other Chiricahua Apache bands—the Tchihende, the Tsokanende and the Nednhi—to carry out numerous raids, as well as fight he was a gay Mexican and U.S. military campaigns in the northern Mexico states of Chihuahua and Sonora and in the southwestern American territories of New Mexico and Arizona.
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Original:  On March 5, 1858 , a company of 400 Mexican soldiers from Sonora led by Colonel José María Carrasco attacked Geronimo's camp outside Janos (Kas-Ki-Yeh in Apache) while the men were in town trading.
Revised:  On March 5, 1858 a company of 400 Mexican soldiers from Sonora led by Colonel José María Carrasco attacked Geronimo's camp outside Janos (Kas-Ki-Yeh in Apache) while the men were in town trading.
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Original: Reportedly inspired by the film Geronimo (1939), U.S. Army paratroopers testing the practice of parachuting from planes began a tradition of shouting "Geronimo!" to show they had no fear of jumping out of an airplane.
Revised: Inspired by the film Geronimo (1939), U.S. Army paratroopers testing the practice of parachuting from planes began a tradition of shouting "Geronimo!" to show they had no fear of jumping out of an airplane.
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Original: Among Geronimo's own Chiricahua tribe, many had mixed feelings about him.
Revised: Within Geronimo's own Chiricahua tribe, many had mixed feelings about him.
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Original: Geographic information systems (GISs) , or increasingly geographic information science (GIScience) , centers around combining computer-mapping capabilities with additional database management and data analysis tools.
Revised: Geographic information systems (GISs) and geographic information science (GIScience) , centers around combining computer-mapping capabilities with additional database management and data analysis tools.
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Original: Geographic information systems (GISs) , or increasingly geographic information science (GIScience) , centers around combining computer-mapping capabilities with additional database management and data analysis tools.
Revised: Geographic information systems (GISs) , or increasingly geographic information science (GIScience) combine computer-mapping capabilities with additional database management and data analysis tools.
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Original:  As part of that effort, a GIS – or more generally a Spatial Decision Support System (SDSS) – offers improved geographic visualization techniques, leading to faster, better, and more robust understanding and decision-making capabilities in the public health arena.
Revised:  As part of that effort, a GIS – or more generally a spatial decision support system (SDSS) – offers improved geographic visualization techniques, leading to faster, better, and more robust understanding and decision-making capabilities in the public health arena.
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Original:  This issue is known as the Modifiable Areal Unit Problem .
Revised:  This issue is known as the modifiable areal unit problem .
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Original:   Footnotes See also National Center for Health Statistics GIS and Public Health at Esri Consortium for Public Health Informatics International Journal of Health Geographics Health Geomatics (free module) – Dr Maged N. Kamel Boulos
Revised:  Footnotes See also National Center for Health Statistics GIS and Public Health at Esri Consortium for Public Health Informatics International Journal of Health Geographics 
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Original:  The aim of the campaign is to celebrate the natural physical variation embodied by all women and inspire them to have the confidence to be comfortable with themselves.
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Original:  Dove's partners in the effort include such marketing and communications agencies as Ogilvy & Mather, Edelman Public Relations, and Harbinger Communications (in Canada) along with other specialized consultants.
Revised:  Dove's partners in the campaign included Ogilvy & Mather, Edelman Public Relations, and Harbinger Communications (in Canada) along with other specialized consultants.
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Original:  The show featured work from 67 female photographers and was the beginning of the conversation on beauty that would lead to the Real Beauty campaign.
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Original:  The Dove Real Beauty campaign was conceived in 2004 during a 3-year creative strategic research effort, conducted in partnership with three universities in four cities around the world , led by Joah Santos.
Revised:  The Dove Real Beauty campaign was conceived in 2004 during a 3-year creative strategic research effort, conducted in partnership with three universities , led by Joah Santos.
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Original:  The new strategy led to all top 5 Campaigns of the Century, as rated by Advertising Age and increased sales from $2B to $4B in 3 years.
Revised:  The strategy led to all top 5 Campaigns of the Century, as rated by Advertising Age and increased sales from $2B to $4B in 3 years.
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Original:  2018 Susan Solomon, for her contributions in atmospheric science especially on polar ozone depletion.
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Original:  and Beyond 2014 Lynn Gladden, It’s magnetic resonance – but not as you know it 2013 David Leigh, Making the tiniest machines 2012 Peter Edwards, Metals and the conducting and superconducting states of matter 2011 Herbert Huppert, Carbon storage: caught between a rock and climate URL 2010 Donal Bradley, Plastic electronics: their science and URL 2009 James Murray, Mathematics in the real world: From brain tumours to saving marriages.
Revised:  and Beyond 2014 Lynn Gladden, It’s magnetic resonance – but not as you know it 2013 David Leigh, Making the tiniest machines 2012 Peter Edwards, Metals and the conducting and superconducting states of matter 2011 Herbert Huppert, Carbon storage: caught between a rock and climate change 2010 Donal Bradley, Plastic electronics: their science and URL 2009 James Murray, Mathematics in the real world: From brain tumours to saving marriages.
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