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Original:  Furthermore, Hamas continues its attempts to execute effective attacks against Israel, and Sunday sent over 10 operatives through a tunnel into Israel . 10 operatives were located and eliminated by the Israeli military.
Revised:  Furthermore, Hamas is continuing its attempts to execute effective attacks against Israel, and Sunday sent over 10 operatives through a tunnel into Israel . 10 operatives were located and eliminated by the Israeli military.
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Original:  Furthermore, Hamas continues its attempts to execute effective attacks against Israel, and Sunday sent over 10 operatives through a tunnel into Israel . 10 operatives were located and eliminated by the Israeli military.
Revised:  Furthermore, Hamas continues its attempts to execute effective attacks against Israel, sending operatives through a tunnel into Israel . 10 operatives were located and eliminated by the Israeli military.
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Original:  On the same day, a gory battle occured in a Palestinian town Shaja'ia, dubbed a "terror stronghold" by Israel.
Revised:  On the same day, a gory battle occurred in a Palestinian town Shaja'ia, dubbed a "terror stronghold" by Israel.
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Original: The Palestinian side has seen over 500 deaths , while on the Israeli side two civilians died as a result of the rockets launched from Gaza and 18 soldiers died during the clashes.
Revised: The Palestinian side has seen over 500 deaths . On the Israeli side two civilians died as a result of the rockets launched from Gaza and 18 soldiers died during the clashes.
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Original: The Palestinian side has seen over 500 deaths , while on the Israeli side two civilians died as a result of the rockets launched from Gaza and 18 soldiers died during the clashes.
Revised: The Palestinian side has seen over 500 deaths , while on the Israeli side two civilians died as a result of the rockets launched from Gaza , while 18 soldiers died during the clashes.
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Original:  Palestinian news channels show damage to civilian infrastructure  .
Revised:  Palestinian news channels have shown damage to civilian infrastructure .
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Original:  In light of the ongoing clashes, American officials have addressed the intensification of the conflict and have called for a ceasefire.
Revised:  In light of the ongoing clashes, American officials have addressed the escalation of the conflict and have called for a ceasefire.
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Original:  The eighth victim was discovered in serious condition on the side of a road—which led to police being called —and died en route to the hospital.
Revised:  Later in the day, civilians came upon an eighth victim in serious condition on the side of a road—which led to police being called —and died en route to the hospital.
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Original:  The eighth victim was discovered in serious condition on the side of a road—which led to police being called —and died en route to the hospital.
Revised:  The eighth victim was discovered in serious condition on the side of a road—which led to police being called . However, the man died en route to the hospital.
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Original:  Soon after,  the alleged shooter was identified Christopher Speight, aged 39, whom state and local police working in conjunction with the National Guard had surrounded in nearby woods.
Revised:  Soon after, the alleged shooter as Christopher Speight, aged 39, whom state and local police working in conjunction with the National Guard had surrounded in nearby woods.
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Original:  According to state police , three of the bodies were found inside a home, and the other four right outside it.
Revised:  According to police sources , three of the bodies were found inside a home, and the other four right outside it.
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Original:  According to state police , three of the bodies were found inside a home, and the other four right outside it.
Revised:  According to state police , three of the bodies were found inside a home, and the other four directly outside it.
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Original:  The rural are was under almost a complete lock  as a perimeter was established that included hundreds of law enforcement officers and soldiers patrolling the area for the suspect.
Revised:  The rural are was under almost a complete lock down as a perimeter was established that included hundreds of law enforcement officers and soldiers patrolling the area for the suspect.
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Original:  While being pursued, Speight allegedly fired multiple high-powered rounds at a state police helicopter.
Revised:  While being pursued, Speight is said to have fired multiple high-powered rounds at a state police helicopter.
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Original:  While being pursued, Speight allegedly fired multiple high-powered rounds at a state police helicopter.
Revised:  While being pursued, Speight allegedly fired multiple high-powered rounds at a state helicopter.
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Original:  Although there were no reported injuries, the bullet forced did rupture the fuel tank forcing it to land.
Revised:  Although there were no reported injuries, the bullets did in fact rupture the fuel tank forcing it to land.
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Original:  Following which, police searched his Appomattox residence where they discovered an undisclosed number of explosive devices on the premises.
Revised:  Following which, police searched his Appomattox residence where they discovered several explosive devices on the premises.
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Original:  He  on to say that situation was under control and that the proper authorities were safely detonating said devices  . Christopher Speight is now currently being housed in a local jail until the charges are officially filed.
Revised:  He went on to say that situation was under control and that the proper authorities were safely detonating said devices . Christopher Speight is now currently being housed in a local jail until the charges are officially filed.
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Original:  He  on to say that situation was under control and that the proper authorities were safely detonating said devices  . Christopher Speight is now currently being housed in a local jail until the charges are officially filed.
Revised:  He on to say that the situation was now under complete control, and that the proper authorities were safely detonating said devices . Christopher Speight is now currently being housed in a local jail until the charges are officially filed.
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Original:  He  on to say that situation was under control and that the proper authorities were safely detonating said devices  . Christopher Speight is now currently being housed in a local jail until the charges are officially filed.
Revised:  He on to say that situation was under control and that the proper authorities were safely detonating said devices . Christopher Speight is currently being housed in a local jail until the charges are officially filed.
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Original:  He  on to say that situation was under control and that the proper authorities were safely detonating said devices  . Christopher Speight is now currently being housed in a local jail until the charges are officially filed.
Revised:  He on to say that situation was under control and that the proper authorities were safely detonating said devices . Christopher Speight is now currently being housed in a local jail until charges are officially filed.
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Original:  The Appomattox Sheriff said that although motives for Speight's action are for now unknown, it is believed that  acted alone
Revised:  The Appomattox Sheriff said that although motives for Speight's action are for now unknown, it is believed that he acted alone
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Original: The rural are was under almost a complete lock down as a perimeter was established that included hundreds of law enforcement officers and soldiers patrolling the area for the suspect.
Revised: The rural area was under almost a complete lock down as a perimeter was established that included hundreds of law enforcement officers and soldiers patrolling the area for the suspect.
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Original: The rural area was under almost a complete lock down as a perimeter was established that included hundreds of law enforcement officers and soldiers patrolling the area for the suspect.
Revised: The rural area was under an almost complete lock down as a perimeter was established that included hundreds of law enforcement officers and soldiers patrolling the area for the suspect.
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Original:  Although there were no reported injuries, the bullets did in fact rupture the fuel tank forcing it to land.
Revised:  Although there were no reported injuries, the bullets did rupture the fuel tank forcing it to land.
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Original:  Following which , police searched his Appomattox residence where they discovered several explosive devices on the premises.
Revised:  Following this , police searched his Appomattox residence where they discovered several explosive devices on the premises.
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Original:  Californians in these area brace themselves from mudslides and flash floods due to the expected 10 inches of rain later today .
Revised:  Californians in these area braced themselves from mudslides and flash floods due to the expected 10 inches of rain later today .
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Original:  The National Weather Service (NWS) predicts 1.5 inches per hour in these fire-affected areas.
Revised:  The National Weather Service (NWS) predicted 1.5 inches per hour in these fire-affected areas.
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Original:  Charles Beck, Los Angeles Police Department chief, yesterday said , "If a Los Angeles police officer comes to your door and tells you to leave: leave.
Revised:  Charles Beck, Los Angeles Police Department chief, advised residents , "If a Los Angeles police officer comes to your door and tells you to leave: leave.
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Original:  In other areas of Los Angeles, the rain is cause minor flooding and large puddles – storm drains are overflowing .
Revised:  In other areas of Los Angeles, the rain caused minor flooding and large puddles – storm drains are overflowing .
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Original:  In other areas of Los Angeles, the rain is cause minor flooding and large puddles – storm drains are overflowing .
Revised:  In other areas of Los Angeles, the rain is cause minor flooding and large puddles – storm drains overflowed .
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Original:  The National Weather Service (NWS) predicted  1.5 inches per hour in these fire-affected areas.
Revised:  The National Weather Service (NWS) predicted 1.5 in) per hour in these fire-affected areas.
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Original:  A Southern California resident preferring to remain unnamed said this in regards to the storm, "I felt that it was a wonderful change from the super hot weather," in reference to the  80 °F  plus temperatures leading into winter
Revised:  A Southern California resident preferring to remain unnamed said this in regards to the storm, "I felt that it was a wonderful change from the super hot weather," in reference to the 80 °F ) plus temperatures leading into winter
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Original:  Californians in these area braced themselves from mudslides and flash floods due to the expected  10 inches of rain yesterday.
Revised:  Californians in these area braced themselves from mudslides and flash floods due to the expected 10 in) of rain yesterday.
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Original: A 2007 report by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC), which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, was at least in part not based on scientific data.
Revised: Part of a major 2007 report by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC), which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, was at least in part not based on scientific data.
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Original: A 2007 report by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC), which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, was at least in part not based on scientific data.
Revised: A 2007 report by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC), which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, has been found to have not been based on scientific data.
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Original:   Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya Jairam Ramesh, India's minister of Environment and Forests, criticized the report when it was initially released , Ramesh reiterated his criticism and told The Times of India: "The health of the glaciers is a cause of grave concern, but the IPCC's alarmist position that they would melt by 2035 was not based on an iota of scientific evidence."
Revised:  Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya Jairam Ramesh, India's minister of Environment and Forests, had criticized the estimate when the report was initially released , Ramesh reiterated his criticism and told The Times of India: "The health of the glaciers is a cause of grave concern, but the IPCC's alarmist position that they would melt by 2035 was not based on an iota of scientific evidence."
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Original:   Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya Jairam Ramesh, India's minister of Environment and Forests, criticized the report when it was initially released , Ramesh reiterated his criticism and told The Times of India: "The health of the glaciers is a cause of grave concern, but the IPCC's alarmist position that they would melt by 2035 was not based on an iota of scientific evidence."
Revised:  Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya Jairam Ramesh, India's minister of Environment and Forests, criticized the report when it was initially released . After the announcement, Ramesh reiterated his criticism and told The Times of India: "The health of the glaciers is a cause of grave concern, but the IPCC's alarmist position that they would melt by 2035 was not based on an iota of scientific evidence."
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Original:  The Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data , "  Zemp added.
Revised:  The Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data " Zemp added.
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Original:  The Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data , "  Zemp added.
Revised:  The Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data , " , Zemp added.
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Original:  It stands by its  conclusion that "mass losses from glaciers and reductions in snow cover over recent decades are projected to accelerate throughout the 21st century, reducing water availability, hydropower potential, and changing seasonality of flows in regions supplied by meltwater from major mountain ranges."
Revised:  It stands by its overall conclusion that "mass losses from glaciers and reductions in snow cover over recent decades are projected to accelerate throughout the 21st century, reducing water availability, hydropower potential, and changing seasonality of flows in regions supplied by meltwater from major mountain ranges."
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Original:  The IPCC also came under fire during the 2009 United Nations Climate Change Conference, when selectively leaked e-mails, hacked from the University of East Anglia, reportedly showed that some scientists were attempting to suppress findings by other climatologists that did not agree with their own findings
Revised:  The IPCC had recently come under fire during the 2009 United Nations Climate Change Conference, when selectively leaked e-mails, hacked from the University of East Anglia, reportedly showed that some scientists were attempting to suppress findings by other climatologists that did not agree with their own findings
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Original: Part of a major 2007 report by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) , which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, has been found to have not been based on scientific data.
Revised: The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) , which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, has been found to have not been based on scientific data.
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Original: Part of a major 2007 report by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) , which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, has been found to have not been based on scientific data.
Revised: Part of a major 2007 report by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) , which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, was not based on scientific data.
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Original:  News reports have suggested that the claim originated in a 1999 article in the popular science magazine New Scientist, and was picked up by the IPCC when it was quoted in a 2005 report by the World Wildlife Fund . Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya According to The Times (UK), most glaciologists believe it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, with some doubting that it will ever happen.
Revised:  News reports have suggested that the claim was picked up by the IPCC when it was quoted in a 2005 report by the World Wildlife Fund . Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya According to The Times (UK), most glaciologists believe it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, with some doubting that it will ever happen.
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Original:  News reports have suggested that the claim originated in a 1999 article in the popular science magazine New Scientist, and was picked up by the IPCC when it was quoted in a 2005 report by the World Wildlife Fund . Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya According to The Times (UK), most glaciologists believe it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, with some doubting that it will ever happen.
Revised:  News reports have suggested that the claim originated in a 1999 article in the popular science magazine New Scientist, and was picked up by the IPCC when it was quoted in a 2005 report by the World Wildlife Fund . Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya According to The Times (UK), most glaciologists believe it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, although some doubt that it will ever happen.
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Original:  There is  evidence of glaciers growing in the neighboring Karakoram mountain range.
Revised:  There is thought to be evidence of glaciers growing in the neighboring Karakoram mountain range.
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Original: The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) has admitted including an inaccurate claim in a major 2007 report, and issued an apology.
Revised: The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) has admitted including a misleadng claim in a major 2007 report, and issued an apology.
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Original:   The IPCC have since admitted that the original claim was "poorly substantiated" and that "well-established standards of evidence were not applied properly" in the preparation of this section of the report.
Revised:  The IPCC have admitted that the original claim was "poorly substantiated" and that "well-established standards of evidence were not applied properly" in the preparation of this section of the report.
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Original:  According to The Times (UK), most glaciologists believe it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, although some doubt that it will ever happen.
Revised:  The consensus among glaciologists is that it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, although some doubt that it will ever happen.
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Original:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that , " There are simply no observations available to make these sorts of statements." "The other thing is that the report says the glaciers are receding faster than anywhere else in the world.
Revised:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that " There are simply no observations available to make these sorts of statements." "The other thing is that the report says the glaciers are receding faster than anywhere else in the world.
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Original:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that , " There are simply no observations available to make these sorts of statements." "The other thing is that the report says the glaciers are receding faster than anywhere else in the world.
Revised:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that , " "The other thing is that the report says the glaciers are receding faster than anywhere else in the world.
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Original:  The Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", Zemp added.
Revised:  The Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", 
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Original:  The statement, which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, was not based on scientific data.
Revised:  The statement, which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, has been found to have not been based on scientific data.
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Original:  News reports have suggested that the claim was picked up by the IPCC when it was quoted in a 2005 report by the World Wildlife Fund, which may itself have drawn on a 1999 article in the popular science magazine New Scientist.
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Original:  This news is in contrast with other global warming findings, such as computer modelling showing that the Pine Island Glacier and Thwaites Glacier, once described as a major "tipping point" for the entire West Antartic Ice Sheet in the embayment of the Amudsen Sea, has reached their own tipping points for eventual collapse, likely to lead to a sea level rise of up to 52 cm over the next century, per the New Scientist
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Original: Upon learning Popov's identity, numerous members of the state-controlled media —in an uncharacteristic move— strongly criticized the police for their passive response to the actions allegedly committed by one of their own.
Revised: Upon learning Popov's identity, numerous members of the state-controlled media strongly criticized the police for their passive response to the actions allegedly committed by one of their own.
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Original:  He succumbed to injuries suffered as a young police officer allegedly beat him into a coma earlier in the month while in a holding cell reserved for the drunk and disorderly.
Revised:  He succumbed to injuries suffered when a young police officer allegedly beat him into a coma earlier in the month while in a holding cell reserved for the drunk and disorderly.
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Original: President Dmitry Medvedev said that such police misconduct was not only angering the Russian public  but was also undermining the state's authority.
Revised: President Dmitry Medvedev said that such police misconduct was not only angering the Russian public , but was also undermining the state's authority.
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Original: After this had gone on for six months Frances was told that if she wanted Tom to die legally then she could ask the High Court to allow his food and water to be withdrawn, so that he would starve to death.
Revised:  Frances was told that if she wanted Tom to die legally then she could ask the High Court to allow his food and water to be withdrawn, so that he would starve to death.
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