wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Her Royal Highness Crown Princess Mary of Denmark has given birth to a healthy baby boy at a Copenhagen hospital at approximately 1: 57am local time this morning, ending many months of waiting for the Royal Family, the Danish public and much of the world.
Revised: Her Royal Highness Crown Princess Mary of Denmark has given birth to a healthy baby boy at a Copenhagen hospital at approximately 1: 57 am local time this morning, ending many months of waiting for the Royal Family, the Danish public and much of the world.
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Original:  The child will become heir apparent when his parents ascend to the Danish throne as King Frederik X and Queen Mar
Revised:  The child will become heir apparent when his parents ascend to the Danish throne as King Frederik X and Queen Mary
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Original:  Had the child been a female, she would be ineligible to succeed the throne, but a male would be allowed to immediately succeed the throne.
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Original: Half a thousand protestors were arrested during the skirmishes , while at least one policeman was killed . Local media reports that at least fifty people have been wounded by the violence.
Revised: Half a thousand protestors were arrested during the skirmishes . Local media reports that at least fifty people have been wounded by the violence.
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Original: There are nearly daily attacks in Dagestan from Islamic militants, wanting  an Islamic state.
Revised: There are nearly daily attacks in Dagestan from Islamic militants, wanting to form an Islamic state.
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Original:  This common black ant eats other insects such as .
Revised:  This common black ant eats other insects , and also .
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Original:  This was in my 3rd year of Biology study I think.
Revised:  This was in my third year of Biology study I think.
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Original:  After exposing the ants to the fungus, we took pictures of each foraging arena 3x per day, and counted how many ants were present on each food-source.
Revised:  After exposing the ants to the fungus, we took pictures of each foraging arena three times per day, and counted how many ants were present on each food-source.
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Original:  The result that healthy ants die sooner when ingesting ROS [, the group of chemicals that includes hydrogen peroxide] but infected ants die less was obtained in another way (as you have to 'force feed' the ROS, as healthy ants, when given the choice, ignore that food-source. 
Revised:  The result that healthy ants die sooner when ingesting ROS [, the group of chemicals that includes hydrogen peroxide] but infected ants die less was obtained in another way (as you have to 'force feed' the ROS, as healthy ants, when given the choice, ignore that food-source. )
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Original:  That said, I plan to investigate this question (among others) further [in] the next couple of years  Another file photo of Formica fusca, this time showing foraging workers feeding.
Revised:  That said, I plan to investigate this question (among others) further [in] the next couple of years . Another file photo of Formica fusca, this time showing foraging workers feeding.
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Original:  Wood ants collect tree-resin, which has anti-microbial properties.
Revised:  collect tree-resin, which has anti-microbial properties.
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Original: The team used , an  species that can form thousand-strong colonies.
Revised: The team used , an ant species that can form thousand-strong colonies.
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Original:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week ” . Ms. Gillard responded to Mr. Abbott’ s claims by saying that the Liberal ’ s proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
Revised:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week " . Ms. Gillard responded to Mr. Abbott’ s claims by saying that the Liberal ’ s proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
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Original:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week ” . Ms. Gillard responded to Mr. Abbott’ s claims by saying that the Liberal ’ s proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
Revised:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week ” . Gillard responded to Mr. Abbott’ s claims by saying that the Liberal ’ s proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
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Original:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week ” . Ms. Gillard responded to Mr. Abbott’ s claims by saying that the Liberal ’ s proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
Revised:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week ” . Ms. Gillard responded to Abbott' s claims by saying that the Liberal ’ s proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
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Original:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week ” . Ms. Gillard responded to Mr. Abbott’ s claims by saying that the Liberal ’ s proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
Revised:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week ” . Ms. Gillard responded to Mr. Abbott’ s claims by saying that the Liberal ' s proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
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Original:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week ".
Revised:  A person earning $100,000 per year will pay just under an extra $5 per week ."
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Original:  The levy is set to contribute to the relief effort to assist in the 5 billion dollar reconstruction of Queensland infrastructure.
Revised:  The levy is set to contribute to the relief effort to assist in the five-billion-dollar reconstruction of Queensland infrastructure.
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Original:  The Government will obtain 3 billion dollars through the scratching of certain schemes and the postponement of others.
Revised:  The Government will obtain three billion dollars through the scratching of certain schemes and the postponement of others.
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Original:  The levy will then contribute the other 2 billion.
Revised:  The levy will then contribute the other two billion.
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Original:  He said that there should be no requirement for Australians to contribute towards a levy, but rather the government should cut back on its own spending.
Revised:  He said there should be no requirement for Australians to contribute towards a levy, but rather the government should cut back on its own spending.
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Original:  Gillard responded to Abbott's claims by saying that the Liberal's proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy  and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
Revised:  Gillard responded to Abbott's claims by saying that the Liberal's proposed paid maternity leave scheme would have required Australian people to pay a levy , and that it is unjustifiable that they then wouldn’t allow for the rebuilding of Queensland.
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Original:  Independent , Bob Katter, has said that until a designated fund for natural disaster relief is established by the Government, he will not approve of any relief levies introduced into parliament.
Revised:  Independent Bob Katter, has said that until a designated fund for natural disaster relief is established by the Government, he will not approve of any relief levies introduced into parliament.
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Original:  Tony Windsor, a fellow independent, agrees .
Revised:  Tony Windsor, a fellow independent, agreed .
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Original:  Currently, there is no certainty that the bill will be introduced yet.
Revised:  There is currently no certainty that the bill will be introduced yet.
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Original: File:Car stuck the flooded Union Drive in the Brisbane suburb of Highgate Hill.jpg| The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, Brisbane The Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard  has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the Queensland floods recovery.
Revised:  The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, Brisbane The Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the Queensland floods recovery.
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Original: File:Car stuck the flooded Union Drive in the Brisbane suburb of Highgate Hill.jpg| The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, Brisbane The Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard  has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the Queensland floods recovery.
Revised: File:Car stuck the flooded Union Drive in the Brisbane suburb of Highgate Hill.jpg| The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, The Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the Queensland floods recovery.
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Original: File:Car stuck the flooded Union Drive in the Brisbane suburb of Highgate Hill.jpg| The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, Brisbane The Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard  has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the Queensland floods recovery.
Revised: File:Car stuck the flooded Union Drive in the Brisbane suburb of Highgate Hill.jpg| The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, Brisbane The of Australia, Julia Gillard has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the Queensland floods recovery.
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Original: File:Car stuck the flooded Union Drive in the Brisbane suburb of Highgate Hill.jpg| The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, Brisbane The Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard  has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the Queensland floods recovery.
Revised: File:Car stuck the flooded Union Drive in the Brisbane suburb of Highgate Hill.jpg| The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, Brisbane The Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard , has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the Queensland floods recovery.
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Original: File:Car stuck the flooded Union Drive in the Brisbane suburb of Highgate Hill.jpg| The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, Brisbane The Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard  has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the Queensland floods recovery.
Revised: File:Car stuck the flooded Union Drive in the Brisbane suburb of Highgate Hill.jpg| The extent of the flooding in the Queensland capital, Brisbane The Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard has today announced a new bill into Parliament to assist in the recovery.
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Original:  A person earning $ 100,000 per year will pay just under an extra  5 per week."
Revised:  A person earning $ 100,000 annually will pay 1 percent. 5 per week."
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Original:  The leader of the opposing Liberal Party , Tony Abbott, has claimed that there is "fat" in the budget.
Revised:  The leader of the opposing , Tony Abbott, has claimed that there is "fat" in the budget.
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Original:  Independent Bob Katter has said that until a designated fund for natural disaster relief is established by the Government, he will not approve of any relief levies introduced into parliament.
Revised:  Independent has said that until a designated fund for natural disaster relief is established by the Government, he will not approve of any relief levies introduced into parliament.
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Original:  Joachim lives in Mississauga, Ontario  
Revised:  Joachim lives in Mississauga, Ontario . 
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Original:  Nelson Mandela, the former South African president, is currently recovering from a collapsed lung in Johannesburg , according to the Reuters news agency.
Revised:  Nelson Mandela, the former South African president, is currently recovering from a collapsed lung in , according to the Reuters news agency.
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Original: US Secretary of Homeland Security Janet Napolitano said Thursday that the country's government would end its color-coded threat assessment system, called the Homeland Security Advisory System.
Revised: United States Secretary of Homeland Security Janet Napolitano said Thursday that the country's government would end its color-coded threat assessment system, called the Homeland Security Advisory System.
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Original: United States Secretary of Homeland Security Janet Napolitano said Thursday that the country's government would end its color-coded threat assessment system, called the Homeland Security Advisory System .
Revised: United States said Thursday that the country's government would end its color-coded threat assessment system, called the Homeland Security Advisory System .
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Original: United States Secretary of Homeland Security Janet Napolitano said Thursday that the country's government would end its color-coded threat assessment system, called the Homeland Security Advisory System .
Revised: United States Secretary of Homeland Security Janet Napolitano said Thursday that the country's government would end its color-coded threat assessment system, called the .
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Original:  Napolitano, who made the announcement at George Washington University , said a new advisory system would be implemented in April.
Revised:  Napolitano, who made the announcement at , said a new advisory system would be implemented in April.
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Original:  The new National Terrorism Advisory System will have only two threat levels: "imminent" and "elevated."
Revised:  The new will have only two threat levels: "imminent" and "elevated."
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Original:  The current system will begin to be deprecated this week, but it has been under the scrutiny of the US Department of Homeland Security since 2009
Revised:  The current system will begin to be deprecated this week, but it has been under the scrutiny of the US since 2009
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Original:   The police force, which gave permission and protection to the neo-nazi group to hold the planned rally was surprised by the counter-protest that ensued.
Revised:  The police force, which gave permission and protection to the neo-nazi group to hold the planned rally , claimed they were caught by surprise in the counter-protest that ensued.
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Original:  Opposition was carried out by concerned citizens , and a coalition of political groups organizing as the Anti-Racist Action .
Revised:  Opposition to the rally was mounted by concerned citizens , and a coalition of political groups organizing as the Anti-Racist Action .
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Original:  Opposition was carried out by concerned citizens , and a coalition of political groups organizing as the Anti-Racist Action .
Revised:  Opposition was carried out by concerned citizens and a coalition of political groups organizing as the Anti-Racist Action .
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Original:  Opposition was carried out by concerned citizens , and a coalition of political groups organizing as the Anti-Racist Action .
Revised:  Opposition was carried out by concerned citizens , and a coalition of political groups organized as a Anti-Racist Action .
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Original:  The counter-rally effectively ended the march  as it was getting started.
Revised:  The counter-rally effectively ended the march just as it was getting started.
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Original:  a local pub was burned down by rioters .
Revised:  a local pub was looted and burned .
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Original:  Ford, who is also African-American, was puzzled as to why the NSM chose Toledo for their rally , "It is not a neighborhood where you have a lot of friction in the first place."
Revised:  Mayor Ford, an African-American, was puzzled as to why the NSM chose Toledo for their rally , "It is not a neighborhood where you have a lot of friction in the first place."
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Original:  Ford, who is also African-American, was puzzled as to why the NSM chose Toledo for their rally , "It is not a neighborhood where you have a lot of friction in the first place."
Revised:  Ford, who is also African-American, was puzzled why the NSM chose Toledo for their rally , "It is not a neighborhood where you have a lot of friction in the first place."
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Original:  Ford, who is also African-American, was puzzled as to why the NSM chose Toledo for their rally , "It is not a neighborhood where you have a lot of friction in the first place."
Revised:  Ford, who is also African-American, was puzzled as to why the NSM chose Toledo and said of the rally location , "It is not a neighborhood where you have a lot of friction in the first place."
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Original:  About 20 members of the International Socialists Organization and the One People's Project , who were marching in opposition to the National Socialist Movement .
Revised:  About 20 members of the International Socialists Organization and the One People's Project were present in opposition to the National Socialist Movement .
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Original:  About 20 members of the International Socialists Organization and the One People's Project , who were marching in opposition to the National Socialist Movement .
Revised:  About 20 members of the International Socialists Organization and the One People's Project , who were marching in opposition to the NSM rally .
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Original:  The NSM claim these counter-demonstrators handed eggs to some African-American counter marchers .
Revised:  The NSM has alleged these groups handed eggs to some African-American counter marchers .
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Original:  The NSM claim these counter-demonstrators handed eggs to some African-American counter marchers .
Revised:  The NSM claim these counter-demonstrators handed eggs to some African-American counter demonstrators .
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Original:  In response to the NSM 's statements the One People's Project co-founder Daryle Lamont Jenkins said, "Bill White has done this to us before.
Revised:  In response to the NSM statements, the One People's Project co-founder Daryle Lamont Jenkins said, "Bill White has done this to us before.
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Original:  White also claimed that the NSM recieved support from community activists and citizens.
Revised:  White also claimed that the NSM received support from community activists and citizens.
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Original: Calm has been restored after a Saturday rally held by members of the National Socialist Movement (NSM) in Toledo, Ohio. lead to a state of emergency being declared when rioting broke out .
Revised: Calm has been restored after a Saturday rally held by members of the National Socialist Movement (NSM) in Toledo, Ohio. lead to a state of emergency being declared when riots ensued .
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Original:  Opposition to the rally was mounted by concerned citizens and a coalition of political groups organized as an Anti-Racist Action group.
Revised:  Opposition to the Nazis was mounted by concerned citizens and a coalition of political groups organized as an Anti-Racist Action group.
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Original:  In response to the NSM statements, the One People's Project co-founder Daryle Lamont Jenkins said, " Bill White has done this to us before.
Revised:  In response to the Nazi's statements, the One People's Project co-founder Daryle Lamont Jenkins said, " Bill White has done this to us before.
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Original:  In response to the NSM statements, the One People's Project co-founder Daryle Lamont Jenkins said, " Bill White has done this to us before.
Revised:  In response to the NSM statements, the One People's Project co-founder Daryle Lamont Jenkins said, " He has done this to us before.
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Original:  Toledo Mayor Jack Ford suggested that it was the NSM's objective to incite violence, "Based on the intelligence we received, that's exactly what they do -- they come into town and get people riled up." Mayor Ford, an African-American, was puzzled as to why the NSM chose Toledo, and said of the rally location, "It is not a neighborhood where you have a lot of friction in the first place."
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Original: “ We are facing a national disaster affecting the lives of our people, ” he said.
Revised: " We are facing a national disaster affecting the lives of our people, ” he said.
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Original: “ We are facing a national disaster affecting the lives of our people, ” he said.
Revised: “ We are facing a national disaster affecting the lives of our people, " he said.
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Original:  The United Nations has attempted to restructure Malawi ’ s economy through programs from the World Bank and the International Monetary Fund.
Revised:  The United Nations has attempted to restructure Malawi ' s economy through programs from the World Bank and the International Monetary Fund.
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Original:  UNICEF Regional Director for Eastern and Southern Africa, Per Engebak has said, “ The numbers of malnourished children are many times higher than the normal emergency threshold. ”
Revised:  UNICEF Regional Director for Eastern and Southern Africa, Per Engebak has said, " The numbers of malnourished children are many times higher than the normal emergency threshold. ”
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Original:  UNICEF Regional Director for Eastern and Southern Africa, Per Engebak has said, “ The numbers of malnourished children are many times higher than the normal emergency threshold. ”
Revised:  UNICEF Regional Director for Eastern and Southern Africa, Per Engebak has said, “ The numbers of malnourished children are many times higher than the normal emergency threshold. "
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Original: The British government will shortly introduce new legislation which is intended to ban incitement to religious hatred.
Revised: The British government will shortly introduce a new law which is intended to ban incitement to religious hatred.
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Original:   "   If the Qur'an is not hate speech, I don't know what is", Christian Voice director Stephen Green told the Guardian newspaper earlier this week, arguing that the Qur'an incites the killing of non-Muslims.
Revised:  " " If the Qur'an is not hate speech, I don't know what is", Christian Voice director Stephen Green told the Guardian newspaper earlier this week, arguing that the Qur'an incites the killing of non-Muslims.
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Original:  Christian Voice has also campaigned against the musical "Jerry Springer the Opera", believing it to be blasphemous , and attacked what it calls  " the horrors of Hinduism      "
Revised:  Christian Voice has previously campaigned against the musical "Jerry Springer the Opera", believing it to be blasphemous , and attacked what it calls " the horrors of Hinduism "
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