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Original:  While writing for Britain's Jane's Information Group . Venter contributed to their publications off and on for 30 years – Al Venter was published, inter alia, by Jane's Defence Weekly, Jane's Intelligence Review, Jane's Terrorism and Security Review, Jane's Islamic Affairs Analyst.
Revised:  Venter has contributed to Britain's Jane's Information Group . Venter contributed to their publications off and on for 30 years – Al Venter was published, inter alia, by Jane's Defence Weekly, Jane's Intelligence Review, Jane's Terrorism and Security Review, Jane's Islamic Affairs Analyst.
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Original:  While writing for Britain's Jane's Information Group . Venter contributed to their publications off and on for 30 years – Al Venter was published, inter alia, by Jane's Defence Weekly, Jane's Intelligence Review, Jane's Terrorism and Security Review, Jane's Islamic Affairs Analyst.
Revised:  While writing for Britain's Jane's Information Group publications for over 30 years – Al Venter was published, inter alia, by Jane's Defence Weekly, Jane's Intelligence Review, Jane's Terrorism and Security Review, Jane's Islamic Affairs Analyst.
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Original:  While writing for Britain's Jane's Information Group . Venter contributed to their publications off and on for 30 years – Al Venter was published, inter alia, by Jane's Defence Weekly, Jane's Intelligence Review, Jane's Terrorism and Security Review, Jane's Islamic Affairs Analyst.
Revised:  While writing for Britain's Jane's Information Group . Venter contributed to their publications off and on for 30 years . He was published, inter alia, by Jane's Defence Weekly, Jane's Intelligence Review, Jane's Terrorism and Security Review, Jane's Islamic Affairs Analyst.
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Original:  He finishing a major work on free-diving (out of cages) with sharks,  published in 2012.
Revised:  His major work on free-diving (out of cages) with sharks, published in 2012.
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Original:  He finishing a major work on free-diving (out of cages) with sharks,  published in 2012.
Revised:  He finishing a major work on free-diving (out of cages) with sharks, was published in 2012.
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Original: Al J. Venter birthname Albertus Johannes Venter (born 25 November 1938) is a South African war journalist, documentary filmmaker, and author of more than forty books who also served as an Africa and Middle East correspondent for Jane's International Defence Review.
Revised: Al J. Venter (born Albertus Johannes Venter (born 25 November 1938) is a South African war journalist, documentary filmmaker, and author of more than forty books who also served as an Africa and Middle East correspondent for Jane's International Defence Review.
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Original: Al J. Venter birthname Albertus Johannes Venter (born 25 November 1938) is a South African war journalist, documentary filmmaker, and author of more than forty books who also served as an Africa and Middle East correspondent for Jane's International Defence Review.
Revised: Al J. Venter birthname Albertus Johannes Venter , 25 November 1938) is a South African war journalist, documentary filmmaker, and author of more than forty books who also served as an Africa and Middle East correspondent for Jane's International Defence Review.
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Original:  Like ts counterpart, the  National Liberation of Guinea, the association was composed of mainly exiled cabinet ministers and university graduates, disconent with Touré's regime.
Revised:  Like ts counterpart, the National Liberation of Guinea, the association was composed of mainly exiled cabinet ministers and university graduates, discontent with Touré's regime.
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Original:  Category:Government of Guinea Category:History of Guinea Category: Organisations based in Fran
Revised:  Category:Government of Guinea Category:History of Guinea Category: Organizations based in Fran
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Original:  Like ts counterpart, the Front for the National Liberation of Guinea, the association was composed of mainly exiled cabinet ministers and university graduates, discontent with Touré's regime.
Revised:  Like its counterpart, the Front for the National Liberation of Guinea, the association was composed of mainly exiled cabinet ministers and university graduates, discontent with Touré's regime.
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Original:  In the final novel of Peter F. Hamilton's Night's Dawn trilogy, an alien race, inhabiting massive "cities" orbiting a red giant, uses mining ships equipped with electromagnetic scoops as an alternative to planetary mining.
Revised:  In the final novel of Peter F. Hamilton's Night's Dawn trilogy, an alien race, inhabiting massive "cities" orbiting a red giant, uses ships equipped with electromagnetic scoops as an alternative to planetary mining.
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Original:  In the final novel of Peter F. Hamilton's Night's Dawn trilogy, an alien race, inhabiting massive "cities" orbiting a red giant, uses mining ships equipped with electromagnetic scoops as an alternative to planetary mining.
Revised:  In the final novel of Peter F. Hamilton's Night's Dawn trilogy, an alien race, inhabiting massive "cities" orbiting a red giant, uses mining ships equipped with electromagnetic ramscoops as an alternative to planetary mining.
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Original:  "42", a 2007 episode of Doctor Who  "Light", a first season episode of Stargate Universe Screenshot of Destiny extending scoops. and others, including Blockade.
Revised:  "42", a 2007 episode of Doctor Who Elite "Light", a first season episode of Stargate Universe Screenshot of Destiny extending scoops. and others, including Blockade.
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Original: 200px|thumb |Destiny approaches a blue supergiant to refuel, in the Stargate Universe episode "Blockade".
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Original:  Description of in-game fuel scoop compartments, their specifications and using instructions.
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Original:  While it is theoretically plausible, most science fiction is concerned with stars as places to be explored, rather than as refueling stops.
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Original:  Method It involves a literal scooping , in which a ship draws plasma directly from the outer surface of a star to use as fuel.
Revised:  It involves a literal scooping , in which a ship draws plasma directly from the outer surface of a star to use as fuel.
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Original:  Method It involves a literal scooping , in which a ship draws plasma directly from the outer surface of a star to use as fuel.
Revised:  Method It involves a literal scooping of plasma directly from the outer surface of a star to use as fuel.
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Original:  specifically the 17th Brigade of the Hammurabi, commanded by Brigadier General Ra'ad Hamdani, and the 14th Brigade and 10th Armoured Brigade of the Medinah.  ]  ] 
Revised:  specifically the 17th Brigade of the Hammurabi, commanded by Brigadier General Ra'ad Hamdani, and the 14th Brigade and 10th Armoured Brigade of the Medinah. artillery] ] 
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Original:  According to his plan, there would be no preliminary shelling or “protective artillery fires ." Hamdani went so far as to require his tanks to fire only high-explosive shells, instead of SABOT armour piercing in an attempt to “frighten the occupants, but not destroy the URL 
Revised:  According to his plan, there would be no preliminary shelling or “protective fires ." Hamdani went so far as to require his tanks to fire only high-explosive shells, instead of SABOT armour piercing in an attempt to “frighten the occupants, but not destroy the URL 
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Original:  According to his plan, there would be no preliminary shelling or “protective artillery fires ." Hamdani went so far as to require his tanks to fire only high-explosive shells, instead of SABOT armour piercing in an attempt to “frighten the occupants, but not destroy the URL 
Revised:  According to his plan, there would be no preliminary shelling or “protective artillery (artillery) fire ." Hamdani went so far as to require his tanks to fire only high-explosive shells, instead of SABOT armour piercing in an attempt to “frighten the occupants, but not destroy the URL 
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Original:  According to his plan, there would be no preliminary shelling or “protective artillery fires ." Hamdani went so far as to require his tanks to fire only high-explosive shells, instead of SABOT armour piercing in an attempt to “frighten the occupants, but not destroy the URL 
Revised:  According to his plan, there would be no preliminary shelling or “protective artillery fires ." Hamdani went so far as to require his tanks to fire only high-explosive shells, instead of SABOT (Armour Piercing) in an attempt to “frighten the occupants, but not destroy the URL 
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Original:  The Kuwaitis reached the Saudi border at 16:30, spending the night on the Kuwaiti side before crossing over the next morning .
Revised:  The Kuwaitis reached the Saudi border at 16:30, spending the night on the Kuwaiti side before crossing over the next morning 
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Original:  See also Battle of Dasman Palace%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:1990 in Kuwait the Bridges Category:History of Kuwait Category:August 1990 even
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:1990 in Kuwait the Bridges Category:History of Kuwait Category:August 1990 even
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Original:  See also Battle of Dasman Palace%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:1990 in Kuwait the Bridges Category:History of Kuwait Category:August 1990 even
Revised:  See also Battle of Dasman Palace%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:1990 in Kuwait the Bridges Category:History of Kuwait Category:August 1990 even
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Original:  See also Battle of Dasman Palace%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:1990 in Kuwait the Bridges Category:History of Kuwait Category:August 1990 even
Revised:  See also Battle of Dasman Palace%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References 
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Original:  The Hammurabi Mechanised Division consisted of two mechanised brigades and one armoured, whereas the Medinah Armoured Division consisted of two armoured brigades and one mechanised.
Revised:  The 1st "Hammurabi" Armoured Division consisted of two mechanised brigades and one armoured, whereas the Medinah Armoured Division consisted of two armoured brigades and one mechanised.
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Original:  specifically the 17th Brigade of the Hammurabi , commanded by Brigadier General Ra'ad Hamdani, and the 14th Brigade and 10th Armoured Brigade of the Medinah.
Revised:  specifically the 17th Brigade of the "Hammurabi" , commanded by Brigadier General Ra'ad Hamdani, and the 14th Brigade and 10th Armoured Brigade of the Medinah.
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Original:  The Hammurabi Mechanised Division of the Iraqi Republican Guard had by this time reached Al Jahra.
Revised:  The "Hammurabi" Mechanised Division of the Iraqi Republican Guard had by this time reached Al Jahra.
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Original: Category: 1925 births Category:
Revised: Category: 1926 births Category:
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Original:  The newly built wrestling venue for the 2010 Delhi Common Wealth Games was named after him to honour his achievement."
Revised:  The newly built wrestling venue for the 2010 Delhi Commonwealth Games was named after him to honour his achievement."
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Original:  He was the first athlete from independent India to win an individual medal in the OlympicsIndia Ministry of Youth Affairs and Sports (YAS), "Proud Moments of Indian Sports," "Olympics Bronze Medal, Helsinki 1952";
Revised:  He was the first athlete from independent India to win an individual medal in the Olympics.India Ministry of Youth Affairs and Sports (YAS), "Proud Moments of Indian Sports," "Olympics Bronze Medal, Helsinki 1952";
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Original: Lovelock, James, (1995) "The Ages of Gaia: A Biography of Our Living Earth" (W.W.Norton Co) Even so, the Gaia hypothesis continues to attract criticism, and today many scientists consider it to be only weakly supported by, or at odds with, the available evidence.
Revised: Lovelock, James, (1995) "The Ages of Gaia: A Biography of Our Living Earth" (W.W.Norton Even so, the Gaia hypothesis continues to attract criticism, and today many scientists consider it to be only weakly supported by, or at odds with, the available evidence.
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Original:    This, he suggests tended to screen out ultraviolet until the formation of the ozone screen, maintaining a degree of homeostasis.
Revised:  Co) This, he suggests tended to screen out ultraviolet until the formation of the ozone screen, maintaining a degree of homeostasis.
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Original:  The Gaia hypothesis siva (), also known as the Gaia theory, Gaia paradigm, or the Gaia principle, proposes that living organisms interact with their inorganic surroundings on Earth to form a synergistic and self-regulating, complex system that helps to maintain and perpetuate the conditions for life on the planet.
Revised:  The Gaia hypothesis (), also known as the Gaia theory, Gaia paradigm, or the Gaia principle, proposes that living organisms interact with their inorganic surroundings on Earth to form a synergistic and self-regulating, complex system that helps to maintain and perpetuate the conditions for life on the planet.
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Original: Lovelock and Watson showed that, over a limited range of conditions, this negative feedback due to competition can stabilize the planet's temperature at a value which supports life, if the energy output of the Sun changes, while a planet without life would show wide temperature swings .
Revised: Lovelock and Watson showed that, over a limited range of conditions, this negative feedback due to competition can stabilize the planet's temperature at a value which supports life, if the energy output of the Sun changes, while a planet without life would show wide temperature changes .
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Original: Garga Haman Adji (born 27 January 1944-dead 20 march 2014 Information on the First Arrondissement of Maroua .) is a Cameroonian politician.
Revised: Garga Haman Adji (born 27 January 1944Information on the First Arrondissement of Maroua .) is a Cameroonian politician.
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Original:  The coupling of photochromic units to enzymes or enzyme cofactors even provides the ability to reversibly turn enzymes "on" and "off", by altering their shape or orientation in such a way that their functions are either "working" or (pen15) "broken".
Revised:  The coupling of photochromic units to enzymes or enzyme cofactors even provides the ability to reversibly turn enzymes "on" and "off", by altering their shape or orientation in such a way that their functions are either "working" or "broken".
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Original: Sometimes, and particularly in the dye industry, the term "irreversible photochromic " is used to describe materials that undergo a permanent color change upon exposure to ultraviolet or visible light radiation.
Revised: Sometimes, and particularly in the dye industry, the term irreversible photochromic is used to describe materials that undergo a permanent color change upon exposure to ultraviolet or visible light radiation.
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Original:  Tenebrescent minerals include hackmanite, spodumene and tugtupite .
Revised:  Tenebrescent minerals include hackmanite, spodumene and tugtupite 
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Original:  Tenebrescent behavior is exploited in synthetic materials for the manufacture of self-adjusting sunglasses, which darken on exposure to sunlight .
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Original:  He is a member of New Democratic Macau Association (quit in 2016).
Revised:  He is a member of New Macau Association (quit in 2016).
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Original:  Preparations heat up as Assembly election draws near and is one of the three pro-democracy lawmakers in Macau.
Revised:  and is one of the three pro-democracy lawmakers in Macau.
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Original: Au Kam San () (born 30 April 1957 in Macau with family roots in Xinxing, Guangdong, China) is a member of Legislative Assembly of Macau.
Revised: Au Kam-san () (born 30 April 1957 in Macau with family roots in Xinxing, Guangdong, China) is a member of Legislative Assembly of Macau.
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Original:  it played up to attributions of loyalty and devoted like-mindedness of the couple, as well as affirming Laodice ’ s position as a member of the dynasty, and her position as being an equal to her husband.
Revised:  it played up to attributions of loyalty and devoted like-mindedness of the couple, as well as affirming Laodice ' s position as a member of the dynasty, and her position as being an equal to her husband.
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Original:  Furthermore, Laodice ’ s position as ‘sister’ to Antiochus mimicked the traditions of the previous Hecatomnid dynasty that ruled Caria during the 4th century BC, integrating the Seleucids into that territory's traditions.
Revised:  Furthermore, Laodice ' s position as ‘sister’ to Antiochus mimicked the traditions of the previous Hecatomnid dynasty that ruled Caria during the 4th century BC, integrating the Seleucids into that territory's traditions.
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Original:  This practice was also borrowed from the Greek world, were Ptolemy II ’ s marriage to his full sister was likened to the divine union of Zeus and Hera, and started a tradition of representing wives as sisters in the Ptolemaic dynasty.
Revised:  This practice was also borrowed from the Greek world, were Ptolemy II ' s marriage to his full sister was likened to the divine union of Zeus and Hera, and started a tradition of representing wives as sisters in the Ptolemaic dynasty.
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Original:  Laodice ’ s donations are evidenced in inscriptions of her honours, and her letters to the towns.
Revised:  Laodice ' s donations are evidenced in inscriptions of her honours, and her letters to the towns.
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Original:  Although the existence of previous honours helped in the development of the royal cult, they couldn’t compete with the glamour of royal administrative festivities.
Revised:  Although the existence of previous honours helped in the development of the royal cult, they could not compete with the glamour of royal administrative festivities.
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Original: Iossif, Lober, “Laodikai and the Goddess Nikephoros,” 65. Although the cult came quite a bit later than Laodice ’ s regency, Antiochus claimed he started the cult in order to celebrate the virtue of Laodice and her piety.
Revised: Iossif, Lober, “Laodikai and the Goddess Nikephoros,” 65. Although the cult came quite a bit later than Laodice ' s regency, Antiochus claimed he started the cult in order to celebrate the virtue of Laodice and her piety.
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Original:  Seleucus IV may have perpetuated further honours related to Laodice by associating her with the goddess Nikephoros-Aphrodite around 177 BCE, due to the relationship of Aphrodite to queens and the appearance of bronzes depicting the goddess around the possible time of Laodice ’ s death.
Revised:  Seleucus IV may have perpetuated further honours related to Laodice by associating her with the goddess Nikephoros-Aphrodite around 177 BCE, due to the relationship of Aphrodite to queens and the appearance of bronzes depicting the goddess around the possible time of Laodice ' s death.
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Original: Laodice III (in Greek Λαοδικη ) also known as Laodika, was a Princess of Pontus and a Seleucid Queen.
Revised: Laodice III (in Greek Λαοδίκη ) also known as Laodika, was a Princess of Pontus and a Seleucid Queen.
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Original: Laodice III (in Greek Λαοδίκη) also known as Laodika, was a Princess of Pontus and a Seleucid Queen .
Revised: Laodice III (in Greek Λαοδίκη) also known as Laodika, was a princess of Pontus and a Seleucid Queen .
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Original: Laodice III (in Greek Λαοδίκη) also known as Laodika, was a Princess of Pontus and a Seleucid Queen .
Revised: Laodice III (in Greek Λαοδίκη) also known as Laodika, was a Princess of Pontus and a Seleucid queen .
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Original:  He was the provincial head of the national party when President Pieter Botha named him to the government in 1985 as Minister of Home Affairs.
Revised:  He was the provincial head of the National Party when President Pieter Botha named him to the government in 1985 as Minister of Home Affairs.
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Original: Jan Christoffel Stoffel Botha (1929–1998) was a South African politician, a member of the National Party, elected representative of Port Natal (until 1989), administrator of Natal Province (1982–1984), Minister of Home Affairs (1985–1989) in the PW Botha government.
Revised: Jan Christoffel "Stoffel" Botha (1929–1998) was a South African politician, a member of the National Party, elected representative of Port Natal (until 1989), administrator of Natal Province (1982–1984), Minister of Home Affairs (1985–1989) in the PW Botha government.
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Original: Jan Christoffel Stoffel Botha (1929–1998) was a South African politician, a member of the National Party, elected representative of Port Natal (until 1989), administrator of Natal Province (1982–1984), Minister of Home Affairs (1985–1989) in the PW Botha government.
Revised: Jan Christoffel Stoffel Botha (1929–1998) was a South African politician, a member of the National Party, elected representative of Port Natal (until 1989), administrator of Natal Province (1982–1984), Minister of Home Affairs (1985–1989) in the P.W. Botha government.
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Original:  He was the provincial head of the National Party when President Pieter Botha named him to the government in 1985 as Minister of Home Affairs.
Revised:  He was the provincial head of the National Party when State President P.W. Botha named him to the government in 1985 as Minister of Home Affairs.
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Original:  In 1989, when Frederik de Klerk came to power, he announced his retirement from political life, and died in 1998. 
Revised:  In 1989, when Frederik de Klerk came to power, he announced his retirement from political life, and died in 1998. References
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Original: Jan Christoffel "Stoffel" Botha (1929–1998) was a South African politician, a member of the National Party, elected representative of Port Natal (until 1989), administrator of Natal Province (1979–1984), Minister of Home Affairs (1985–1989) in the P.W. Botha government.
Revised:  "Stoffel" Botha (1929–1998) was a South African politician, a member of the National Party, elected representative of Port Natal (until 1989), administrator of Natal Province (1979–1984), Minister of Home Affairs (1985–1989) in the P.W. Botha government.
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Original: Elected to Natal where he owned a farm, he was named administrator of the province in province in 1979 by Pieter Botha.
Revised: Elected to Natal where he owned a farm, he was appointed administrator of the province in province in 1979 by Pieter Botha.
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Original: Elected to Natal where he owned a farm, he was named administrator of the province in province in 1979 by Pieter Botha.
Revised: Elected to Natal where he owned a farm, he was named administrator of the province in 1979.
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Original:  In 1989 , when Frederik de Klerk came to power, he announced his retirement from political life , and died in 1998.
Revised:  In 1989 he announced his retirement from political life , and died in 1998.
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Original:  Her fiance is David Gubser, a Swiss kayaker.
Revised:  Her fiancé is David Gubser, a Swiss kayaker.
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Original:  She was the first US canoeist to qualify for the 2008 Summer Olympics, where she was eliminated in the semifinals of the K-1 500 m event.
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Original: Chittaranjan Kolhatkar ( ;
Revised: Chittaranjan Kolhatkar ( 
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