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Original:  His death was announced by US President Barack Obama who said that he was killed and his body was captured by US forces after a "firefight".
Revised:  US President Barack Obama who said that he was killed and his body was captured by US forces after a "firefight".
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Original:  His death was announced by US President Barack Obama who said that he was killed and his body was captured by US forces after a "firefight".
Revised:  His death was announced by US President Barack Obama said that he was killed and his body was captured by US forces after a "firefight".
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Original:  His death was announced by US President Barack Obama who said that he was killed and his body was captured by US forces after a "firefight".
Revised:  His death was announced by US President Barack Obama who said that he was killed and his body captured by US forces after a "firefight".
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Original:  President Obama said to the nation  "I think we can all agree this is a good day for America.
Revised:  President Obama said to the nation , "I think we can all agree this is a good day for America.
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Original:  Anders Fogh Rasmussen, the cheif of NATO has vowed to remain fighting in Afghanistan despite the death of bin Laden.
Revised:  Anders Fogh Rasmussen, the chief of NATO, has vowed to remain fighting in Afghanistan despite the death of bin Laden.
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Original:  The crimes of al Qaeda touched most continents, bringing tragedy and loss of life to thousands of men, women and children."
Revised:  The crimes of al-Qaeda touched most continents, bringing tragedy and loss of life to thousands of men, women and children."
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Original:  Several Asian countries also welcomed the killing of bin Laden . Chinese spokeswoman Jiang Yu said "China has taken note of the announcement.
Revised:  Several Asian countries also welcomed bin Laden's death . Chinese spokeswoman Jiang Yu said "China has taken note of the announcement.
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Original:  " We believe the death of Osama bin Laden is a milestone and a positive development for the international anti-terrorism efforts."
Revised:  We believe the death of Osama bin Laden is a milestone and a positive development for the international anti-terrorism efforts."
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Original: Bin Laden was killed by US forces in Pakistan Leaders and officals around the world have had varied reactions to the announcement that Osama bin Laden has been killed during a US military operation in Pakistan.
Revised:  Leaders and officals around the world have had varied reactions to the announcement that Osama bin Laden has been killed during a US military operation in Pakistan.
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Original: Bin Laden was killed by US forces in Pakistan Leaders and officals around the world have had varied reactions to the announcement that Osama bin Laden has been killed during a US military operation in Pakistan.
Revised: Bin Laden was killed by US forces in Pakistan Leaders and officals around the world have issued varied reactions to the announcement that Osama bin Laden has been killed during a US military operation in Pakistan.
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Original: Bin Laden was killed by US forces in Pakistan Leaders and officals around the world have had varied reactions to the announcement that Osama bin Laden has been killed during a US military operation in Pakistan.
Revised: Bin Laden was killed by US forces in Pakistan Leaders and officals around the world have had varied reactions to the announcement that Osama bin Laden has been killed during a U.S. military operation in Pakistan.
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Original:  Today we are reminded that as a nation there is nothing we can't do.
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Original:  He said  "We may not always know their names, we may not always know their stories, but they are always there on the front lines of freedom and we are truly blessed.
Revised:  He said : "We may not always know their names, we may not always know their stories, but they are always there on the front lines of freedom and we are truly blessed.
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Original:  As commander-in-chief, I could not be prouder of our men and women in uniform ," the president said ." That is true now in today's wars, and it has been true in all of our wars and it is why we are here today."
Revised:  As commander-in-chief, I could not be prouder of our men and women in uniform ." That is true now in today's wars, and it has been true in all of our wars and it is why we are here today."
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Original:  As commander-in-chief, I could not be prouder of our men and women in uniform ," the president said ." That is true now in today's wars, and it has been true in all of our wars and it is why we are here today."
Revised:  As commander-in-chief, I could not be prouder of our men and women in uniform ," the president said ." 
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Original:  Anders Fogh Rasmussen , the chief of NATO, has vowed to remain fighting in Afghanistan despite the death of bin Laden.
Revised:  , the chief of NATO, has vowed to remain fighting in Afghanistan despite the death of bin Laden.
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Original:  Anders Fogh Rasmussen , the chief of NATO, has vowed to remain fighting in Afghanistan despite the death of bin Laden.
Revised:  Anders Fogh Rasmussen , the chief of NATO, vowed the organization would remain fighting in Afghanistan despite the death of bin Laden.
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Original:  He released a statement saying "As terrorism continues to pose a direct threat to our security and international stability, international cooperation remains key and Nato is at the heart of that cooperation . Nato allies and partners will continue their mission to ensure that Afghanistan never again becomes a safe haven for extremism, but develops in peace and security."
Revised:  "As terrorism continues to pose a direct threat to our security and international stability, international cooperation remains key and Nato is at the heart of that cooperation . Nato allies and partners will continue their mission to ensure that Afghanistan never again becomes a safe haven for extremism, but develops in peace and security."
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Original:  He released a statement saying "As terrorism continues to pose a direct threat to our security and international stability, international cooperation remains key and Nato is at the heart of that cooperation . Nato allies and partners will continue their mission to ensure that Afghanistan never again becomes a safe haven for extremism, but develops in peace and security."
Revised:  He released a statement saying "As terrorism continues to pose a direct threat to our security and international stability, international cooperation remains key and NATO is at the heart of that cooperation . Nato allies and partners will continue their mission to ensure that Afghanistan never again becomes a safe haven for extremism, but develops in peace and security."
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Original:  Statements have also been released by the United Nations and the European Union.
Revised:  The United Nations and the European Union.
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Original:  While Jerzy Buzek, the President of the European Parliament said " We have woken up in a more secure world ." %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%%  British Prime Minister David Cameron said " This news will be welcomed right across our country .
Revised:  While Jerzy Buzek, the President of the European Parliament said " We have woken up in a more secure world ." %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% , the British Prime Minister David Cameron said " This news will be welcomed right across our country .
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Original:  While Jerzy Buzek, the President of the European Parliament said " We have woken up in a more secure world ." %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%%  British Prime Minister David Cameron said " This news will be welcomed right across our country .
Revised:  While Jerzy Buzek, the President of the European Parliament said " We have woken up in a more secure world ." %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% British Prime Minister David Cameron said " will be welcomed right across our country .
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Original:  Indeed, we'll have to be particularly vigilant in the weeks ahead, but it is, I believe, a massive step forward.
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Original:  " while Silvio Berlusconi, the Italian Prime Minster released a statement saying "This is a great outcome in the fight against evil, in the fight against terrorism, a great outcome for the United States and for all democracies".
Revised:  " Italian Prime Minster released a statement saying "This is a great outcome in the fight against evil, in the fight against terrorism, a great outcome for the United States and for all democracies".
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Original:  " while Silvio Berlusconi, the Italian Prime Minster released a statement saying "This is a great outcome in the fight against evil, in the fight against terrorism, a great outcome for the United States and for all democracies".
Revised:  " while Silvio Berlusconi, the Italian Prime Minster Silvio Berlusconi said: "This is a great outcome in the fight against evil, in the fight against terrorism, a great outcome for the United States and for all democracies".
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Original:   Several Asian countries also welcomed bin Laden's death  . Chinese spokeswoman Jiang Yu said "China has taken note of the announcement.
Revised:  Angela Merkel, the German chancellor, said the killing of bin Laden was a "decisive strike" at al-Qaeda. "At his command and in his name, terror was enforced into many countries against men women and children, Christians as well as Muslims," she said. "Osama bin Laden suggested that he was operating in the name of Islam, but in reality he makes a mockery of the fundamental values of his own and every other religion." Several Asian countries also welcomed bin Laden's death . Chinese spokeswoman Jiang Yu said "China has taken note of the announcement.
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Original:   Several Asian countries also welcomed bin Laden's death  . Chinese spokeswoman Jiang Yu said "China has taken note of the announcement.
Revised:  Several Asian countries also said bin Laden's death . Chinese spokeswoman Jiang Yu said "China has taken note of the announcement.
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Original:  Comments also came from Japan, Malaysia and Singapore   
Revised:  Japan, Malaysia and Singapore 
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Original: The United Nations and the also welcomed the news.
Revised: The U.N. and the also welcomed the news.
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Original: The launch of the Arianne 5 ECA rocket has been postponed due to a technical hitch.
Revised: The launch of the Ariane 5 ECA rocket has been postponed due to a technical hitch.
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Original:  The rocket is the ECA version of the Arianne 5 rocket, which has been modified to enable it to carry a heavier payload.
Revised:  The rocket is the ECA version of the Ariane 5 rocket, which has been modified to enable it to carry a heavier payload.
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Original:  The maiden flight of the Arianne 5 ECA ended in disaster in 2002 when the rocket veered off course over the Atlantic Ocean and self-destructed, dumping two satellites worth 600 million euros into the sea.
Revised:  The maiden flight of the Ariane 5 ECA ended in disaster in 2002 when the rocket veered off course over the Atlantic Ocean and self-destructed, dumping two satellites worth 600 million euros into the sea.
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Original: frame|Ariane 5 previously launching The launch of the Ariane 5 ECA rocket has been postponed due to a technical hitch.
Revised:  The launch of the Ariane 5 ECA rocket has been postponed due to a technical hitch.
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Original: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ]   summit of Pacific Rim leaders including  US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
Revised:  Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ] summit of Pacific Rim leaders including US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
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Original: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ]   summit of Pacific Rim leaders including  US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
Revised: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest in the streets of the capital today against the coming ] summit of Pacific Rim leaders including US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
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Original: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ]   summit of Pacific Rim leaders including  US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
Revised: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of downtown ] summit of Pacific Rim leaders including US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
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Original: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ]   summit of Pacific Rim leaders including  US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
Revised: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ] The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) summit of Pacific Rim leaders including US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
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Original: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ]   summit of Pacific Rim leaders including  US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
Revised: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ] summit of Pacific Rim leaders will include US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
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Original: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ]   summit of Pacific Rim leaders including  US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
Revised: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ] summit of Pacific Rim leaders including US President George W Bush Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
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Original: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ]   summit of Pacific Rim leaders including  US President George W Bush . Seoul%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
Revised: CURRENTLY EDITING... --Elliot K 14:14,13 November 2005 (UTC) Thousands of South Koreans joined a union-organised protest on the streets of the capital today against the coming ] summit of Pacific Rim leaders including US President George W Bush . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summitopens this week in the South Korean port city of Pusan.
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Original:  Its agenda includes discussions on how to enhance global free trade and minimise damage from a bird flu pandemic .
Revised:  Its agenda includes discussions on how to enhance global free trade .
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Original:  Protesters in red headbands carried placards saying "No Bush visit" and "No APEC".
Revised:  Protesters ' placards declared "No Bush visit" and "No APEC".
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Original:  They also demanded a revision of domestic labour laws to improve conditions for temporary workers and a better social security net for all  workers.
Revised:  They are demanding a revision of domestic labour laws to improve conditions for temporary workers and a better social security net for all workers.
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Original:  They also demanded a revision of domestic labour laws to improve conditions for temporary workers and a better social security net for all  workers.
Revised:  They also demanded a revision of domestic labour laws to improve conditions for temporary workers . The protestors also want a better social security net for all workers.
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Original:  Police put the turnout at more than 20,000.
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Original:  Riot police lined the protest route and used buses to block streets as protesters marched near to the US embassy and the presidential Blue House.
Revised:  Riot police lined the protest route , using buses to block streets as protesters marched near to the US embassy and the presidential Blue House.
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Original:  Riot police lined the protest route and used buses to block streets as protesters marched near to the US embassy and the presidential Blue House.
Revised:  Riot police lined the protest route and used buses to block streets as protesters marched close to the US embassy and the presidential Blue House.
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Original:  A city police official said there was no report of violence.
Revised:  City police officials said there was no report of violence.
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Original:  The rally was organised by the Korean Confederation of Trade Unions  , the second-biggest and more militant of South Korea's two main umbrella labour groups .
Revised:  The rally was organised by the Korean Confederation of Trade Unions (KCTU) , the second-biggest and more militant of South Korea's two main umbrella labour groups .
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Original:  The rally was organised by the Korean Confederation of Trade Unions  , the second-biggest and more militant of South Korea's two main umbrella labour groups .
Revised:  The rally was organised by the Korean Confederation of Trade Unions , the second-biggest and more militant of South Korea's two main umbrella labour organisations .
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Original: Reuters Thousands of S Koreans protest against APEC URL ====== Organizers expect 100, 000 people to participate in Nov.18 protest%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Annie I. Bang BUSAN - Civic activist groups are preparing for massive protests against the Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation summit later this week, and police said it has countermeasures in place for any kind of protest.
Revised: Reuters Thousands of S Koreans protest against APEC URL Organizers expect 100, 000 people to participate in Nov.18 protest%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Annie I. Bang BUSAN - Civic activist groups are preparing for massive protests against the Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation summit later this week, and police said it has countermeasures in place for any kind of protest.
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Original: Reuters Thousands of S Koreans protest against APEC URL ====== Organizers expect 100, 000 people to participate in Nov.18 protest%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Annie I. Bang BUSAN - Civic activist groups are preparing for massive protests against the Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation summit later this week, and police said it has countermeasures in place for any kind of protest.
Revised: Reuters Thousands of S Koreans protest against APEC URL ====== %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Annie I. Bang BUSAN - Civic activist groups are preparing for massive protests against the Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation summit later this week, and police said it has countermeasures in place for any kind of protest.
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Original: Reuters Thousands of S Koreans protest against APEC URL ====== Organizers expect 100, 000 people to participate in Nov.18 protest%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Annie I. Bang BUSAN - Civic activist groups are preparing for massive protests against the Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation summit later this week, and police said it has countermeasures in place for any kind of protest.
Revised: Reuters Thousands of S Koreans protest against APEC URL ====== Organizers expect 100, 000 people to participate in Nov.18 protest%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BUSAN - Civic activist groups are preparing for massive protests against the Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation summit later this week, and police said it has countermeasures in place for any kind of protest.
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Original:  "We will fight aggressively at the national rally on Nov. 18 against the Busan APEC Summit and open Busan International People Forum by gathering all Korean progressives including workers, farmers and students," a Busan-based anti-APEC group posted its website.
Revised:  "We will fight aggressively at the national rally on Nov. 18 against the Busan APEC Summit and open Busan International People Forum by gathering all Korean progressives including workers, farmers and students," 
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