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Original: Mustafa Osman Ismail, Sudan's Presidential Advisor, opened the possibility of allowing some United Nations peacekeeping troops into its troubled Darfur region.
Revised: Mustafa Osman Ismail, Sudan's Presidential Advisor, opened the possibility of allowing some United Nations peacekeepers into its troubled Darfur region.
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Original: A United Nations airdrop of food packages, in 2004 Mustafa Osman Ismail, Sudan's Presidential Advisor, opened the possibility of allowing some United Nations peacekeepers into its troubled Darfur region.
Revised:  Mustafa Osman Ismail, Sudan's Presidential Advisor, opened the possibility of allowing some United Nations peacekeepers into its troubled Darfur region.
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Original:  Two people who were participating in an Information Management external exam which was held over several sessions due to low resources.
Revised:  An Information Management external exam which was held over several sessions due to low resources.
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Original:  Two people who were participating in an Information Management external exam which was held over several sessions due to low resources.
Revised:  Two people who were participating in an Information Management external exam had to be held over several sessions due to low resources.
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Original:  The two people were required to remain in a secure environment for 30 minutes after the exam after their had started, they did not .
Revised:  The two people were required to remain in a secure environment for 30 minutes after the exam following theirs had started, they did not .
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Original:  The two people were required to remain in a secure environment for 30 minutes after the exam after their had started, they did not .
Revised:  The two people were required to remain in a secure environment for 30 minutes after the exam after their had started, two did not which was considered a breach of the rules .
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Original:  And seven peoples  submitted portfolios had authenticity issues.
Revised:  And seven peoples ' submitted portfolios had authenticity issues.
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Original:  In total, € 2.2 million was  diverted from the marine's purchasing services using false invoices.
Revised:  In total, € 2.2 million was supposedly diverted from the marine's purchasing services using false invoices.
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Original:   € 185 000 was allegedly used to paint the Prince's villa, install lights in the garden, for the purchase of carpet and furniture, and for his secretariat and for animal clinics the Prince supports .
Revised:  Roughly € 185 000 was allegedly used to paint the Prince's villa, install lights in the garden, for the purchase of carpet and furniture, and for his secretariat and for animal clinics the Prince supports .
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Original:  There are 13 accused , but the  Prince himself is only a witness in this case, because there have been no charges against him.
Revised:  There are 13 accused , but the The Prince himself is only a witness in this case, because there have been no charges against him.
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Original:  There are 13 accused , but the  Prince himself is only a witness in this case, because there have been no charges against him.
Revised:  There are 13 accused , but the Prince himself is being treated only as a witness in this case, because there have been no charges against him.
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Original:  There are 13 accused , but the  Prince himself is only a witness in this case, because there have been no charges against him.
Revised:  There are 13 accused , but the Prince himself is only a witness in this case, there have been no charges against him.
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Original:  The Attorney General in Hasselt  has said that there are no elements in the investigation that point to the fact that Laurent was aware of the affair, something, several accused have contested  in the press   
Revised:  The Attorney General in Hasselt has said that there are no elements in the investigation that point to the fact that Laurent was aware of the affair, however several accused have contested in the press 
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Original:  The Attorney General in Hasselt  has said that there are no elements in the investigation that point to the fact that Laurent was aware of the affair, something, several accused have contested  in the press   
Revised:  The Attorney General in Hasselt has said that there are no elements in the investigation that point to the fact that Laurent was aware of the affair, something, several accused have contested this in the press 
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Original:  Vaessen claims that the Prince actively participated in the fraud, and that he fears a cover-up.
Revised:  Vaessen has declared in the media during the last month that the Prince actively participated in the fraud, and that he fears a cover-up.
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Original:  His status as a Prince has several judicial consequences for Laurent.
Revised:  Laurent's status as a Prince has several judicial consequences for Laurent.
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Original:  He is not protected from judicial pursuit as a Prince, but he is also a Senator by law.
Revised:  He is not protected from judicial pursuit because he is also a Senator by law.
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Original:  However,  Prosecutor Erwin Steyls has chosen to have Laurent interrogated by the police last night in Hasselt.
Revised:  However, Public Prosecutor Erwin Steyls has chosen to have Laurent interrogated by the police last night in Hasselt.
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Original:   During the last month, the case has caused a several spin-off discussions in Belgium.
Revised: Quote During the last month, the case has caused a several spin-off discussions in Belgium.
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Original:   During the last month, the case has caused a several spin-off discussions in Belgium.
Revised:  Nobody is above the law and the Justice Department must be able to complete it's task in full independence. When the courts find embezzlements, it seems fair to me that they would be compensated by anyone who profited from them.-King Albert II of Belgium. During the last month, the case has caused a several spin-off discussions in Belgium.
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Original:  First, the regional governments are  investigating and discussing their donations to the IRGT/KINT, an environmental organisation supported by Prince Laurent.
Revised:  First, the regional governments are now investigating and discussing their donations to the IRGT/KINT, an environmental organisation supported by Prince Laurent.
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Original:  Some politicians are suggesting to limit the role of the Monarchy, and other think that only the King and Queen, the Crown Prince or Princess and the widow(er) of the King or Queen should receive state funding .
Revised:  Some politicians are suggesting to limit the role of the Monarchy, and other think that only the King and Queen, the Crown Prince or Princess and the widow(er) of the King or Queen should receive state funding 
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Original:  Twelve marine officers and contractors are being accused of document fraud, working as a gang, bribe , embezzlement of government money etc. and could face 10 years in prison.
Revised:  Twelve marine officers and contractors are being accused of document fraud, collusion, bribery , embezzlement of government money etc. and could face 10 years in prison.
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Original: Socialist leader said that in choosing Obama over , voters in the United States had voted for "an America of openness and solidarity, fully engaged on the international scene and conscious of the challenges facing our planet: peace, economy and the environment".
Revised:  leader said that in choosing Obama over , voters in the United States had voted for "an America of openness and solidarity, fully engaged on the international scene and conscious of the challenges facing our planet: peace, economy and the environment".
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Original: Leaders from around the world have congratulated re-elected U.S. President on his success at the ballot box. leader stated that he "will continue to work with President Obama to preserve the strategic interests of Israel's citizens" and describing relations between the U.S. and Israel as "rock solid".
Revised: Leaders from around the world have congratulated re-elected President on his success at the ballot box. leader stated that he "will continue to work with President Obama to preserve the strategic interests of Israel's citizens" and describing relations between the U.S. and Israel as "rock solid".
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Original: Leaders from around the world have congratulated re-elected U.S. President on his success at the ballot box. leader stated that he "will continue to work with President Obama to preserve the strategic interests of Israel's citizens" and describing relations between the U.S. and Israel as "rock solid".
Revised: Leaders from around the world have congratulated re-elected U.S. President on his success at the ballot box. leader stated that he "will continue to work with President Obama to preserve the strategic interests of Israel's citizens" and described relations between the U.S. and Israel as "rock solid".
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Original:  Others within the ruling party were not so optimistic about the relationship  with member criticising Obama for "ill-advised" policies towards Israel and hoping that Obama "resets his course relating to Israel and our region for the next four years".
Revised:  Others within the ruling party were not so optimistic about the relationship , with member criticising Obama for "ill-advised" policies towards Israel and hoping that Obama "resets his course relating to Israel and our region for the next four years".
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Original:  Others within the ruling party were not so optimistic about the relationship  with member criticising Obama for "ill-advised" policies towards Israel and hoping that Obama "resets his course relating to Israel and our region for the next four years".
Revised:  Others within the ruling party were not so optimistic about the relationship with member criticising Obama for "ill-advised" policies towards Israel and hoping Obama "resets his course relating to Israel and our region for the next four years".
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Original:  A statement on behalf of leader expressed hope that Obama "continues his efforts to achieve peace in the Middle East ".
Revised:  A statement on behalf of leader expressed hope that Obama "continues his efforts to achieve peace in the ".
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Original:  The British Prime Minister took time from his tour of the  to congratulate Obama and listed as shared priorities a trade deal between the U.S. and the United Kingdom as well as solving the crisis in . , leader of the opposition  stated on that Obama's success in the election was "based on building fairer economy and optimism about what politics can achieve".
Revised:  The Prime Minister took time from his tour of the to congratulate Obama and listed as shared priorities a trade deal between the U.S. and the United Kingdom as well as solving the crisis in . , leader of the opposition stated on that Obama's success in the election was "based on building fairer economy and optimism about what politics can achieve".
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Original:  The British Prime Minister took time from his tour of the  to congratulate Obama and listed as shared priorities a trade deal between the U.S. and the United Kingdom as well as solving the crisis in . , leader of the opposition  stated on that Obama's success in the election was "based on building fairer economy and optimism about what politics can achieve".
Revised:  The British Prime Minister took time from his tour of the to congratulate Obama and listed as shared priorities a trade deal between the U.S. and the as well as solving the crisis in . , leader of the opposition stated on that Obama's success in the election was "based on building fairer economy and optimism about what politics can achieve".
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Original:  The British Prime Minister took time from his tour of the  to congratulate Obama and listed as shared priorities a trade deal between the U.S. and the United Kingdom as well as solving the crisis in . , leader of the opposition  stated on that Obama's success in the election was "based on building fairer economy and optimism about what politics can achieve".
Revised:  The British Prime Minister took time from his tour of the to congratulate Obama and listed as shared priorities a trade deal between the U.S. and the United Kingdom as well as solving the crisis in . , leader of the opposition , stated on that Obama's success in the election was "based on building fairer economy and optimism about what politics can achieve".
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Original:  leader said that in choosing Obama over , voters in the United States had voted for "an America of openness and solidarity, fully engaged on the international scene and conscious of the challenges facing our planet: peace, economy and the environment".
Revised:  leader said in choosing Obama over , voters in the United States had voted for "an America of openness and solidarity, fully engaged on the international scene and conscious of the challenges facing our planet: peace, economy and the environment".
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Original:  He listed economic growth, unemployment  and the Middle East as challenges that the two politicians would have to face. leader stated that she "deeply appreciated" meetings and conversations with Obama on issues including "overcoming the global financial and economic crisis".
Revised:  He listed economic growth, unemployment , and the Middle East as challenges that the two politicians would have to face. leader stated that she "deeply appreciated" meetings and conversations with Obama on issues including "overcoming the global financial and economic crisis".
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Original:  He listed economic growth, unemployment  and the Middle East as challenges that the two politicians would have to face. leader stated that she "deeply appreciated" meetings and conversations with Obama on issues including "overcoming the global financial and economic crisis".
Revised:  He listed economic growth, unemployment and the Middle East as challenges the two politicians would have to face. leader stated that she "deeply appreciated" meetings and conversations with Obama on issues including "overcoming the global financial and economic crisis".
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Original:  He listed economic growth, unemployment  and the Middle East as challenges that the two politicians would have to face. leader stated that she "deeply appreciated" meetings and conversations with Obama on issues including "overcoming the global financial and economic crisis".
Revised:  He listed economic growth, unemployment and the Middle East as challenges that the two politicians would have to face. leader stated she "deeply appreciated" meetings and conversations with Obama on issues including "overcoming the global financial and economic crisis".
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Original:  Across , Obama received congratulations from President , President  and , the Prime Minister of .
Revised:  Across , Obama received congratulations from President , President , and , the Prime Minister of .
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Original:  Others within the ruling party were not so optimistic about the relationship, with member criticising Obama for "ill-advised" policies towards Israel and hoping Obama "resets his course relating to Israel and our region for the next four years".
Revised:  Some others within the ruling party were not so optimistic about the relationship, with member criticising Obama for "ill-advised" policies towards Israel and hoping Obama "resets his course relating to Israel and our region for the next four years".
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Original: A U.S. Nuclear powered submarine and a Japanese oil-tanker have collided in the Arabian Sea.
Revised: A U.S. Nuclear-powered submarine collided with a Japanese oil-tanker have collided in the Arabian Sea.
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Original: A U.S. Nuclear powered submarine and a Japanese oil-tanker have collided in the Arabian Sea.
Revised: A U.S. Nuclear powered submarine and a Japanese oil-tanker 
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Original:  The incident occurred late last night when the  USS Newport News submarine collided with the stern of the Japanese oil-tanker, causing minor damage to the tanker.
Revised:  in the Straits of Hormuz late last night when the USS Newport News submarine collided with the stern of the Japanese oil-tanker, causing minor damage to the tanker.
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Original:  The incident occurred late last night when the  USS Newport News submarine collided with the stern of the Japanese oil-tanker, causing minor damage to the tanker.
Revised:  The incident occurred late last night . Only minor damage to the tanker and no serious injuries were reported. USS Newport News submarine collided with the stern of the Japanese oil-tanker, causing minor damage to the tanker.
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Original:  The incident occurred late last night when the  USS Newport News submarine collided with the stern of the Japanese oil-tanker, causing minor damage to the tanker.
Revised:  The incident occurred late last night when the The USS Newport News submarine collided with the stern of the Japanese oil-tanker, causing minor damage to the tanker.
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Original:  The recent incident is a stark reminder of the February 2001 incident when a U.S. Submarine rammed into the Japanese fishing vessel in waters off Hawaii, killing nine peopl
Revised:  The recent incident is a stark reminder of the February 2001 incident when a U.S. Submarine rammed into a Japanese fishing vessel in waters off Hawaii, killing nine peopl
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Original:  The recent incident is a stark reminder of the February 2001 incident when a U.S. Submarine rammed into the Japanese fishing vessel in waters off Hawaii, killing nine peopl
Revised:  The recent incident is a stark reminder of the February 2001 incident when a U.S. Submarine rammed into the Japanese fishing vessel in waters off Hawaii, killing nine people
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Original:  A sadhus named Hari Chaitanaya Brahmachari said that, "Millions of people are taking baths in this river because Hindus consider the Ganges a pious river.
Revised:  A sadhu named Hari Chaitanaya Brahmachari said that, "Millions of people are taking baths in this river because Hindus consider the Ganges a pious river.
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Original: Thousands of  Hindu Holy Men, also known as sadhus, threatened to boycott festivals during their pilgrimage to the Ganges River (also known as the Ganga), where they planned to wash away their sins by bathing in the water.
Revised: Thousands of Hindu Holy Men, also known as sadhus, threatened to boycott festivals during their pilgrimage to the Ganges , where their rituals involve washing away their sins by bathing in the water.
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Original:  The sadhus said that the river was to polluted and that the pollution level must be fixed by January 12, 2007.
Revised:  The sadhus say that the pollution level must be fixed by January 12, 2007.
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Original:  The sadhus said that the river was to polluted and that the pollution level must be fixed by January 12, 2007.
Revised:  The sadhus said that the river was to polluted and that the pollution level must be corrected by January 12, 2007.
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Original:  If (the) Ganges is not cleaned within next few days, I will take jal samadhi," which is a suicide ritual .
Revised:  If (the) Ganges is not cleaned within next few days, I will take jal samadhi," which is a suicide ritual 
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Original:  During the 45-day festival around 70 million Hindus are anticipated to show up, making the festival one of the largest regular gatherings in the world
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Original: India's yearly pilgrimage to the Ganges river rivier , worshiped by Hindus as the goddess Ganga, is the worlds largest gathering of people, with around 70 million participants, dwarfing other religious pilgrimages.
Revised: India's yearly pilgrimage to the Ganges river , worshiped by Hindus as the goddess Ganga, is the worlds largest gathering of people, with around 70 million participants, dwarfing other religious pilgrimages.
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Original:  A Somali Defence Ministry official has additionally reported that American helicopters launched an attack against ICU militants in Afmadow, a city near the Kenyan border, 350 kilometres southwest of Mogadishu.
Revised:  A Somali Defence Ministry official has additionally reported that American helicopters launched an attack against ICU fighters in Afmadow, a city near the Kenyan border, 350 kilometres southwest of Mogadishu.
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Original: 300px|An AC-130 gunship, like the one shown here, attacked a site in southern Somalia on Monday.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An attack against Ras Kamboni — a remote island near the Kenyan border, represents the first American involvement in the tumultous country since the the 1993 operation that resulted in the deaths of as many as 1,500 Somali militiamen and civilians.
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Original:  The AC-130 gunship attack killed an unknown number of civilians, alternatingly reported as 4, 19 or 31.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mixed reactions from international community Ban Ki-Moon, secretary-general of the United Nations, expressed concern that the unilateral actions represented a "new dimension" that could escalate hostilities.
Revised:  The AC-130 gunship attack killed an unknown number of civilians, alternatingly reported as 4, 19 or 31.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  The concern was echoed by the Italian foreign ministry declared its "...opposition to unilateral initiatives which could set off new tensions" the Italian Foreign Ministry said in a statement.
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Original:  The AC-130 gunship attack killed an unknown number of civilians, alternatingly reported as 4, 19 or 31.
Revised:  The AC-130 gunship attack killed an unknown number of civilians, alternatingly reported as 4, 19 or 
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Original:  Mixed reactions from international community Ban Ki-Moon, secretary-general of the United Nations, expressed concern that the unilateral actions represented a "new dimension" that could escalate hostilities.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The concern was echoed by the Italian foreign ministry declared its "...opposition to unilateral initiatives which could set off new tensions" the Italian Foreign Ministry said in a statement.
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Original:  Ethiopia, which borders Somalia, sent in troops on Dec. 24 to defeat the Islamic movement that was in contradiction with Somalia's internationally recognized government, which at the time controlled only the western town of Baidoa
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Original:  which at the time controlled only the western town of Baidoa . "In the name of my country and the transition parliamentary representatives I ask that the international community makes its voice heard, even if frail, before this unlimited and unjustified aggression against Somalia”, said Sharif Salah Mohamed Ali, former dean of the University of Mogadishu and Somali transition representative.
Revised:  which at the time controlled only the western town of Baidoa "In the name of my country and the transition parliamentary representatives I ask that the international community makes its voice heard, even if frail, before this unlimited and unjustified aggression against Somalia”, said Sharif Salah Mohamed Ali, former dean of the University of Mogadishu and Somali transition representative.
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