wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Professor PZ MyersAfter the press release, Myers   started receiving death threats.
Revised:  Professor PZ Myers started receiving death threats.
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Original:  Professor PZ MyersAfter the press release, Myers   started receiving death threats.
Revised:  Professor PZ MyersAfter the press release, Myers After the press release, Myers started receiving death threats.
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Original:  It was later revealed that it was not her, but Charles (Chuck) Kroll, her husband, who sent the email from the default address on her computer   .
Revised:  It was later revealed that it was not her, but Charles (Chuck) Kroll, her husband, who sent the email from the default address on her computer . .
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Original:  The criticism was fed in part by  the Catholic League and its President Bill Donohue who in a press release urged supporters to get Myers fired . Professor PZ Myers "It is hard to think of anything more vile than to intentionally desecrate the Body of Christ.
Revised:  The criticism was fed in part by a press release by the Catholic League and its President Bill Donohue who in a press release urged supporters to get Myers fired . Professor PZ Myers "It is hard to think of anything more vile than to intentionally desecrate the Body of Christ.
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Original:  The criticism was fed in part by  the Catholic League and its President Bill Donohue who in a press release urged supporters to get Myers fired . Professor PZ Myers "It is hard to think of anything more vile than to intentionally desecrate the Body of Christ.
Revised:  The criticism was fed in part by the Catholic League and its President Bill Donohue . Professor PZ Myers "It is hard to think of anything more vile than to intentionally desecrate the Body of Christ.
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Original:  Regarding the last two points, Laden writes "Whatever."
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Original:  The student  began receiving death threats and response, Myers said it was just a "cracker" and if any of his readers could acquire some consecrated Eucharistic hosts he would treat the wafers "with profound disrespect and heinous cracker abuse, all photographed and presented here on the web."
Revised:  The student allegedly began receiving death threats and response, Myers said it was just a "cracker" and if any of his readers could acquire some consecrated Eucharistic hosts he would treat the wafers "with profound disrespect and heinous cracker abuse, all photographed and presented here on the web."
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Original:  It is unclear wether the truck was amongst the vehicles hit, or if a bus was involved.
Revised:  It is unclear whether the truck was amongst the vehicles hit, or if a bus was involved.
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Original:  A fifth carriage was detatched from the train.
Revised:  A fifth carriage was detached from the train.
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Original:  Heavy equipment has been dispatched to the scene to remove the carriages, and doznes of emergency vehicles are present.
Revised:  Heavy equipment has been dispatched to the scene to remove the carriages, and dozens of emergency vehicles are present.
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Original:  When police arrived the suspect got into his car and fled engaging roughly 20 cruisers in a 30 miles chase ended near Mount Sinai Medical Center's emergency room in Miami Beach.
Revised:  When police arrived the suspect got into his car and fled engaging roughly 20 cruisers in a 30 mile chase which ended near Mount Sinai Medical Center's emergency room in Miami Beach.
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Original:  Lewis is now facing serious charges since the K-9 is considered an officer .  Miami-Dade Police Department is handling the investigation which involves Broward Sheriff Office and Miami Beach police    
Revised:  Lewis is now facing serious charges since the K-9 is considered an officer . Miami-Dade Police Department is handling the investigation which involves Broward Sheriff Office and Miami Beach police . 
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Original: The United States Federal Aviation Authority (FAA) has anounced that inertion systems in airliner fuel tanks are to be made mandatory.
Revised: The United States Federal Aviation Authority (FAA) has anounced that inerting systems in airliner fuel tanks are to be made mandatory.
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Original:  The move, in conjunction with the U.S. Department of Transportation (DOT), is in response to a recomendation made by the country's National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) as part of its investigation into a 1996 air disaster   
Revised:  The move, in conjunction with the U.S. Department of Transportation (DOT), is in response to a recomendation made by the country's National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) as part of its investigation into a 1996 air disaster . 
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Original:  One of the most feasible ways of doing this is with nitrogen pumped into the tank, reducig the amount of oxygen avilible and making ignition difficult or impossible  
Revised:  One of the most feasible ways of doing this is with nitrogen pumped into the tank, reducing the amount of oxygen avilible and making ignition difficult or impossible 
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Original:  It also requires all carriers to retrofit their fleets, with half of their airliners to be complient within six years and every jetliner in the US to have the technology fitted in nine years  
Revised:  It also requires all carriers to retrofit their fleets, with half of their airliners to be complient within six years and every jetliner in the US to have the technology fitted in nine years . 
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Original: The wreckage of TWA 800, reconstructed for the investigation The United States Federal Aviation Authority (FAA) has anounced that inerting systems in airliner fuel tanks are to be made mandatory.
Revised: The wreckage of TWA 800, reconstructed for the investigation The United States Federal Aviation Authority (FAA) has announced that inerting systems in airliner fuel tanks are to be made mandatory.
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Original:  The move, in conjunction with the U.S. Department of Transportation (DOT), is in response to a recomendation made by the country's National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) as part of its investigation into a 1996 air disaster.
Revised:  The move, in conjunction with the U.S. Department of Transportation (DOT), is in response to a recommendation made by the country's National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) as part of its investigation into a 1996 air disaster.
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Original:  It was ultimatly determined that center wing fuel tank had exploded after sparking faulty wiring ignited a volatile fuel-air mix in the tank.
Revised:  It was ultimately determined that center wing fuel tank had exploded after sparking faulty wiring ignited a volatile fuel-air mix in the tank.
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Original:  One of the most feasible ways of doing this is with nitrogen pumped into the tank, reducing the amount of oxygen avilible and making ignition difficult or impossible.
Revised:  One of the most feasible ways of doing this is with nitrogen pumped into the tank, reducing the amount of oxygen available and making ignition difficult or impossible.
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Original:  Since TWA 800 there have also been similar explosions in Thailand and India, but both occured on the ground and resulted in no fatalities.
Revised:  Since TWA 800 there have also been similar explosions in Thailand and India, but both occurred on the ground and resulted in no fatalities.
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Original:  It also requires all carriers to retrofit their fleets, with half of their airliners to be complient within six years and every jetliner in the US to have the technology fitted in nine years.
Revised:  It also requires all carriers to retrofit their fleets, with half of their airliners to be compliant within six years and every jetliner in the US to have the technology fitted in nine years.
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Original:  The FAA's anouncement was made at the Virginia hanger where the remains of Flight 800 are stored.
Revised:  The FAA's announcement was made at the Virginia hanger where the remains of Flight 800 are stored.
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Original:  Air carriers, who untill now have fought against the changes, say that there will be a cost running into millions of dollars.
Revised:  Air carriers, who until now have fought against the changes, say that there will be a cost running into millions of dollars.
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Original:  If the nitrogen system is installed, the cost of retrofiting an airliner is at US$92,000 for mid-range jets such as the Boeing 737 and Airbus A320, and costs $311,000 for a Boeing 777 or other similar long-range widebodied airliner.
Revised:  If the nitrogen system is installed, the cost of retrofitting an airliner is at US$92,000 for mid-range jets such as the Boeing 737 and Airbus A320, and costs $311,000 for a Boeing 777 or other similar long-range widebodied airliner.
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Original:  According to newspaper reports, they said during that visit that they would return yesterday to carry out the beheading.
Revised:  According to newspaper reports, they said that they would return yesterday to carry out the beheading.
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Original:  Wikinews does not know if they followed through with this    ] 
Revised:  Wikinews does not know if they followed through with this . ] 
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Original: Gordon Brown, the UK Prime Minister , recently offered UK support to help combat the spread of incidents like this.
Revised: Gordon Brown, the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom , recently offered UK support to help combat the spread of incidents like this.
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Original: Gordon Brown, the UK Prime Minister , recently offered UK support to help combat the spread of incidents like this.
Revised: Gordon Brown, the UK Prime Minister , recently offered the United Kingdom's support to help combat the spread of incidents like this.
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Original:  He claimed that "the security training force [provided by the UK] ... will be support for the Nigerians to be able to have trainers and others who can build up this capacity locally to deal with the problems of lawlessness that exists in the area.
Revised:  He said that "the security training force [provided by the UK] ... will be support for the Nigerians to be able to have trainers and others who can build up this capacity locally to deal with the problems of lawlessness that exists in the area.
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Original:  It is situated across from Cambridge Rindge and Latin School  Previously limited to one location at 148 Mount Auburn Street, the second store seats approximately 30 people and serves sandwiches.
Revised:  It is situated across from Cambridge Rindge and Latin School . Previously limited to one location at 148 Mount Auburn Street, the second store seats approximately 30 people and serves sandwiches.
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Original:  Previously limited to one location at 148 Mount Auburn Street, the second store seats approximately 30 people and sells sandwiches,  as well as some produce and other foods.
Revised:  Previously limited to one location at 148 Mount Auburn Street, the second store seats approximately 30 people and sells sandwiches, as well as some produce and snack foods.
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Original:  The store does not appear to be air-conditioned.
Revised:  The store is air-conditioned.
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Original:  The nine injured were taken to Fengxian District Central Hospital, where one was tranfered to Ruijin Hospital with burns and another to Shanghai No. 6 People's Hospital with suspected injuries to his spine.
Revised:  The nine injured were taken to Fengxian District Central Hospital, where one was transfered to Ruijin Hospital with burns and another to Shanghai No. 6 People's Hospital with suspected injuries to his spine.
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Original:  Meanwhile, local authorites say the beam fell due to poor construction.
Revised:  Meanwhile, local authorities say the beam fell due to poor construction.
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Original:  Production at the site is not expected to be afeected
Revised:  Production at the site is not expected to be affected
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Original:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN, VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries, fitness clubs & organizations, arena-style events (3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting, bicycle test-riding), and recreation sports & physical education symposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from today (July 18) until next Monday (July 21).
Revised:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN, VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries, fitness clubs & organizations, arena-style events (3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting, bicycle test-riding), and recreation sports & physical education symposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21).
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Original: 240px| 3-on-3 Basketball Tournament Arena.
Revised: 240px| Basketball Tournament Arena.
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Original:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started  with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries ,  fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting,  bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
Revised:  This year's Leisure Taiwan trade show (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries , fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting, bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
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Original:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started  with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries ,  fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting,  bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
Revised:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started today, with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries , fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting, bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
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Original:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started  with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries ,  fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting,  bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
Revised:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started with 131 companies' participating including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries , fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting, bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
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Original:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started  with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries ,  fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting,  bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
Revised:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started with 131 companies' participation including sports media companies such as ESPN and VideoLand Television , fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting, bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
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Original:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started  with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries ,  fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting,  bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
Revised:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries , fitness clubs . There were also a variety of sports being played in the arena built for the trade show. The events included a 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting, bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
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Original:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started  with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries ,  fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting,  bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
Revised:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries , fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting, and bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
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Original:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started  with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries ,  fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting,  bicycle test-riding ), and recreation sports physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
Revised:  Different with last year, the 2008 2nd Leisure Taiwan (a.k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started with 131 companies' participation including sports media (ESPN , VideoLand Television), bicycle and sporting good industries , fitness clubs organizations, arena-style events ( 3-on-3 basketball tournament, free style shooting, bicycle test-riding physical educationsymposiums at Taipei World Trade Center from yesterday (July 18) until next Monday (July 21) .
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Original:  This year's Leisure Taiwan trade show(a .k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started today, with 131 companies' participating including sports media companies such as ESPN and VideoLand Television, businesses selling sports equiptment, fitness clubs.
Revised:  This year's Leisure Taiwan trade show(a .k.a Taiwan Sport Recreation and Leisure Show) started today, with 131 companies' participating including sports media companies such as ESPN and VideoLand Television, businesses selling sports equipment and fitness clubs.
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Original:  With the main topic of carbon-saving and energy-efficiency  , bicycles and fitness sport equipments are frequently asked from local and trade visitors.
Revised:  A major topic in the trade show was energy-efficiency , bicycles and fitness sport equipments are frequently asked from local and trade visitors.
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Original:  In addition, companies from arcade amusement industry had planned showcasing at "2008 Digital E-Park  " exhibition by Ministry of Economic Affairs from next Tuesday (July 22) instead of 2008 Leisure Taiwan.
Revised:  In addition, companies from the electronics industry plan to promote there industry at "2008 Digital E-Park " exhibition by Ministry of Economic Affairs from next Tuesday (July 22) instead of 2008 Leisure Taiwan.
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Original:  In addition, companies from arcade amusement industry had planned showcasing at "2008 Digital E-Park  " exhibition by Ministry of Economic Affairs from next Tuesday (July 22) instead of 2008 Leisure Taiwan.
Revised:  In addition, companies from arcade amusement industry had planned showcasing at "2008 Digital E-Park . " exhibition by Ministry of Economic Affairs from next Tuesday (July 22) instead of 2008 Leisure Taiwan.
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Original: A major topic in the trade show was energy-efficiency and, as a result, bicycles and similar sports equipment was being heavily promoted.
Revised: A major topic in the trade show was energy-efficiency and, as a result, bicycles and similar sports equipment were being heavily promoted.
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Original:  In previous years, organisations from the electronics  , have showcased there products at Leisure Taiwan.
Revised:  In previous years, organizations from the electronics , have showcased there products at Leisure Taiwan.
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Original:  In previous years, organisations from the electronics  , have showcased there products at Leisure Taiwan.
Revised:  In previous years, organisations from the electronics industry , have showcased there products at Leisure Taiwan.
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Original:  Julian Assange, an investigative editor on Wikileaks claimed that the information in the documents "adds weight to Cuban statements that the United States economic embargo of the island has forced it to rely on slow and expensive satellite links for Internet connectivity.   
Revised:  Julian Assange, an investigative editor on Wikileaks claimed that the information in the documents "adds weight to Cuban statements that the United States economic embargo of the island has forced it to rely on slow and expensive satellite links for Internet connectivity. " 
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Original:  They base this on a fact that a cable between Cuba and Florida, which is a much shorter distance then between Cuba and Venezuela, would cost half a million dollars.
Revised:  They base this on a fact that a cable between Cuba and Florida, which is a much shorter distance than between Cuba and Venezuela, would cost half a million dollars.
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