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Original:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , "  " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
Revised:  Helmet boxing or locker boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , " " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
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Original:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , "  " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
Revised:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " cage rage" , " " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
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Original:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , "  " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
Revised:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , " buckets " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
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Original:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , "  " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
Revised:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , " " , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
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Original:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , "  " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
Revised:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , " " Buckets , " helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
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Original:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , "  " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
Revised:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , " " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " helmets and gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
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Original:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , "  " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements , or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
Revised:  Helmet boxing or Locker Boxing (also called a " Cage Rage , " " Buckets , " "Helmet fight" or " Helmets and Gloves ") is a game played by primarily teenage hockey or lacrosse players in their dressing rooms, basements or locker rooms. abcnews "Dangerous New Trend: Kids' Version of Fight Club" These are generally not supervised by adults.
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Original:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links www.ctv.ca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sports culture Category:Rites of passage Category:Ice hockey cultu
Revised:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links www.ctv.ca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sports culture Category:Rites of passage Category:Ice hockey cultu
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Original:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links www.ctv.ca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sports culture Category:Rites of passage Category:Ice hockey cultu
Revised:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight " %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links www.ctv.ca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sports culture Category:Rites of passage Category:Ice hockey cultu
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Original:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links www.ctv.ca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sports culture Category:Rites of passage Category:Ice hockey cultu
Revised:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% www.ctv.ca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sports culture Category:Rites of passage Category:Ice hockey cultu
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Original:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links www.ctv.ca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sports culture Category:Rites of passage Category:Ice hockey cultu
Revised:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sports culture Category:Rites of passage Category:Ice hockey cultu
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Original:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links www.ctv.ca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sports culture Category:Rites of passage Category:Ice hockey cultu
Revised:  "Helmet fight"myspace "Helmet fight " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links www.ctv.ca%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: Definition and Context Guerilla Crosswalks involve the act of modifying existing crosswalks or painting new crosswalk lines without jurisdictional approval and with the intent of improving pedestrian and other non-automobile safety.
Revised:  Guerilla Crosswalks involve the act of modifying existing crosswalks or painting new crosswalk lines without jurisdictional approval and with the intent of improving pedestrian and other non-automobile safety.
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Original: Definition and Context Guerilla Crosswalks involve the act of modifying existing crosswalks or painting new crosswalk lines without jurisdictional approval and with the intent of improving pedestrian and other non-automobile safety.
Revised: Definition and Context Guerrilla crosswalks involve the act of modifying existing crosswalks or painting new crosswalk lines without jurisdictional approval and with the intent of improving pedestrian and other non-automobile safety.
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Original:  Many guerilla tactics react to the delays and inefficiencies in attempting to follow proper or legal channels.
Revised:  Many guerrilla tactics react to the delays and inefficiencies in attempting to follow proper or legal channels.
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Original:  Whatever the motivation, guerilla crosswalks are a strategic response by those unsatisfied with existing conditions.
Revised:  Whatever the motivation, guerrilla crosswalks are a strategic response by those unsatisfied with existing conditions.
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Original:  Case Studies/Examples
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Original:  The Oxford English Dictionary ’ s definition of guerilla includes: “ referring to actions or activities performed in an impromptu way, often without authorization.
Revised:  The Oxford English Dictionary ' s definition of guerilla includes: “ referring to actions or activities performed in an impromptu way, often without authorization.
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Original:  The Oxford English Dictionary ’ s definition of guerilla includes: “ referring to actions or activities performed in an impromptu way, often without authorization.
Revised:  The Oxford English Dictionary ’ s definition of guerilla includes: " referring to actions or activities performed in an impromptu way, often without authorization.
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Original:  ” These interventions are a common strategy within Tactical Urbanism, a term used to describe any low-cost, often temporary change to the built environment intended to improve local livability.
Revised:  " These interventions are a common strategy within Tactical Urbanism, a term used to describe any low-cost, often temporary change to the built environment intended to improve local livability.
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Original:  Walkability and Quality of Life indicators are common topics in urban planners ’ and urban advocates ’ vocabulary in recent years.
Revised:  Walkability and Quality of Life indicators are common topics in urban planners ' and urban advocates ’ vocabulary in recent years.
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Original:  Walkability and Quality of Life indicators are common topics in urban planners ’ and urban advocates ’ vocabulary in recent years.
Revised:  Walkability and Quality of Life indicators are common topics in urban planners ’ and urban advocates ' vocabulary in recent years.
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Original:  Sometimes an act of rebellion such as painting an “illegal” (i.e. unsanctioned) crosswalk is the only response that will move some jurisdictions to action.
Revised:  Sometimes an act of rebellion such as painting an "illegal" (i.e. unsanctioned) crosswalk is the only response that will move some jurisdictions to action.
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Original:  Others simply want safer intersections near their children ’ s schools.
Revised:  Others simply want safer intersections near their children ' s schools.
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Original:  One Public Works official commented in this way, “ These changes to City streets are illegal, potentially unsafe and adding to the City's costs of maintenance and repair….
Revised:  One Public Works official commented in this way, " These changes to City streets are illegal, potentially unsafe and adding to the City's costs of maintenance and repair….
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Original:  ” Crosswalks are a signal to drivers that pedestrians may be present.
Revised:  " Crosswalks are a signal to drivers that pedestrians may be present.
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Original:  After paving was complete, new crosswalks should have been painted, but the task was left undone with the contractor ’ s justification that the cold weather prevented any street striping.
Revised:  After paving was complete, new crosswalks should have been painted, but the task was left undone with the contractor ' s justification that the cold weather prevented any street striping.
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Original:  The local city council woman rather than pursue some level of prosecution actually offered a hearty “ thank you. ” Honolulu, Hawaii has some of the highest pedestrian fatality rates in the United States.
Revised:  The local city council woman rather than pursue some level of prosecution actually offered a hearty " thank you. ” Honolulu, Hawaii has some of the highest pedestrian fatality rates in the United States.
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Original:  The local city council woman rather than pursue some level of prosecution actually offered a hearty “ thank you. ” Honolulu, Hawaii has some of the highest pedestrian fatality rates in the United States.
Revised:  The local city council woman rather than pursue some level of prosecution actually offered a hearty “ thank you. " Honolulu, Hawaii has some of the highest pedestrian fatality rates in the United States.
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Original:  Within the crosswalk of one of these busy intersections, residents altered the crosswalk lines so that they spelled out “Aloha,” the traditional Hawaiian salutation.
Revised:  Within the crosswalk of one of these busy intersections, residents altered the crosswalk lines so that they spelled out "Aloha," the traditional Hawaiian salutation.
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Original:  While the perpetrators sought to introduce a level of humanity to the dangerous location, city officials stated that the change was a “ deviation from the standard. ”
Revised:  While the perpetrators sought to introduce a level of humanity to the dangerous location, city officials stated that the change was a " deviation from the standard. ”
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Original:  While the perpetrators sought to introduce a level of humanity to the dangerous location, city officials stated that the change was a “ deviation from the standard. ”
Revised:  While the perpetrators sought to introduce a level of humanity to the dangerous location, city officials stated that the change was a “ deviation from the standard. "
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Original: Guerrilla crosswalks involve the act of modifying existing crosswalks or painting new crosswalk lines  without jurisdictional approval and with the intent of improving pedestrian and other non-automobile safety.
Revised: Guerrilla crosswalks are created by modifying existing pedestrian crossing or painting new crosswalk lines without jurisdictional approval and with the intent of improving pedestrian and other non-automobile safety.
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Original: Guerrilla crosswalks involve the act of modifying existing crosswalks or painting new crosswalk lines  without jurisdictional approval and with the intent of improving pedestrian and other non-automobile safety.
Revised: Guerrilla crosswalks involve the act of modifying existing crosswalks or painting new crosswalk lines . This is done without jurisdictional approval and with the intent of improving pedestrian and other non-automobile safety.
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Original:  The Oxford English Dictionary's definition of guerilla includes: "referring to actions or activities performed in an impromptu way, often without authorization."
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Original:  These interventions are a common strategy within Tactical Urbanism , a term used to describe any low-cost, often temporary change to the built environment intended to improve local livability.
Revised:  These interventions are a common strategy within tactical urbanism , a term used to describe any low-cost, often temporary change to the built environment intended to improve local livability.
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Original:  Walkability and Quality of Life indicators are common topics in urban planners' and urban advocates' vocabulary in recent years.
Revised:  Background Walkability and quality of life indicators are common topics in urban planners' and urban advocates' vocabulary in recent years.
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Original:  With the increasing body of research focused on measuring  and in some cases  marketing the walkability and quality of life in cities, citizens and decision-makers alike are focused on improving intersections, sidewalks, and streetscapes.
Revised:  With the increasing body of research focused on measuring , and in some cases marketing the walkability and quality of life in cities, citizens and decision-makers alike are focused on improving intersections, sidewalks, and streetscapes.
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Original:  With the increasing body of research focused on measuring  and in some cases  marketing the walkability and quality of life in cities, citizens and decision-makers alike are focused on improving intersections, sidewalks, and streetscapes.
Revised:  With the increasing body of research focused on measuring and in some cases , marketing the walkability and quality of life in cities, citizens and decision-makers alike are focused on improving intersections, sidewalks, and streetscapes.
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Original:  Tactical Urbanism is focused generally on small-scale, quick, and low-cost changes to a place.
Revised:  Tactical urbanism is focused generally on small-scale, quick, and low-cost changes to a place.
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Original:  Sometimes an act of rebellion such as painting an "illegal" (i.e. unsanctioned ) crosswalk is the only response that will move some jurisdictions to action.
Revised:  Sometimes an act such as painting an "illegal" (i.e. unsanctioned ) crosswalk is the only response that will move some jurisdictions to action.
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Original:  Sometimes an act of rebellion such as painting an "illegal" (i.e. unsanctioned ) crosswalk is the only response that will move some jurisdictions to action.
Revised:  Sometimes an act of rebellion such as painting an unsanctioned crosswalk is the only response that will move some jurisdictions to action.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  These interventions are a common strategy within tactical urbanism, a term used to describe any low-cost, often temporary change to the built environment intended to improve local livability.
Revised:  These interventions are a common strategy within tactical urbanism, a type of low-cost, often temporary change to the built environment intended to improve local livability.
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Original:  Although this tactic appears to respond to unsafe conditions at the interface of pedestrian and automobile circulation , it is not without its opponents.
Revised:  This tactic is often a response to unsafe conditions at the interface of pedestrian and automobile circulation , it is not without its opponents.
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Original:  Although this tactic appears to respond to unsafe conditions at the interface of pedestrian and automobile circulation , it is not without its opponents.
Revised:  Although this tactic appears to respond to unsafe conditions at the interface of pedestrian and automobile circulation and is not without its opponents.
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Original: Guerrilla crosswalks are created by modifying existing pedestrian crossing or painting new crosswalk lines.
Revised: Guerrilla crosswalks are created by modifying existing pedestrian crossings or painting new crosswalk lines.
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Original: Spreadability is a concept that describes the contribution, distribution and circulation of information on media platforms.
Revised: In media studies, spreadability is the wide distribution and circulation of information on media platforms.
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Original:  The   original copy of the (textual, visual, audio) information does not need to be replicated perfectly in order to display the characteristics of spreadability, rather the original can be manipulated or maintained in its original form and still be a product of this process.
Revised:  The The original copy of the (textual, visual, audio) information does not need to be replicated perfectly in order to display the characteristics of spreadability, rather the original can be manipulated or maintained in its original form and still be a product of this process.
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Original:  For example, the Susan Boyle Britain's Got Talent audition was spread all over the web for different reasons that links to the characteristics of spreadability.
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Original:  Background Spreadability was coined by Henry Jenkins, a media scholar renowned for his work in communication studies.
Revised:  Background Spreadability was coined by Henry Jenkins, a media scholar known for his work in communication studies.
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Original:  the subject-object dimension of production  
Revised:  the subject-object dimension of production . 
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Original:  the subject-object dimension of production  
Revised:  the subject-object dimension of production Mediums and How They're Spread Spreadability is possible through the use of media. A “medium” is any tool that can be used by anybody to deliver various forms of media (any information, a picture, etc.) to an individual or a group of people at any given point in time. As one could infer from the name, a “medium,” is essentially between two things (e.g. a person listening to the radio in their car). Media content is produced, and/or ‘altered,’ URL and then circulated on the media platform(s). According to Karcher, the three main types of spreadable media are “from scratch (original), altered (changed in someway before being circulated), and ‘as-is’ (circulated before any alterations are made).” No matter the involvement/contribution an individual takes part in when it comes to spreadable media, every aspect is extremely valuable because every person involved works together either directly or indirectly
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Original:  No matter the involvement/contribution an individual takes part in when it comes to spreadable media, every aspect is extremely valuable because every person involved works together either directly or indirectly  
Revised:  No matter the involvement/contribution an individual takes part in when it comes to spreadable media, every aspect is extremely valuable because every person involved works together either directly or indirectly . 
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Original: Colonel Thomas Moody (1779–1849), , , Knight of the Order of Military Merit of France, was a British Colonial Office expert and aide-de-camp  , geopolitical theorist, Royal Engineer, and  merchant.
Revised: Colonel Thomas Moody (1779–1849), , , Knight of the Order of Military Merit of France, was a British expert aide-de-camp , geopolitical theorist, Royal Engineer, and merchant.
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Original: Colonel Thomas Moody (1779–1849), , , Knight of the Order of Military Merit of France, was a British Colonial Office expert and aide-de-camp  , geopolitical theorist, Royal Engineer, and  merchant.
Revised: Colonel Thomas Moody (1779–1849), , , Knight of the Order of Military Merit of France, was a British Colonial Office expert and aide-de-camp , geopolitical theorist, Royal Engineer, and colonial merchant.
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Original:  and  Director of the British Royal Gunpowder Mills.
Revised:  and the Director of the British Royal Gunpowder Mills.
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Original:  Michaels , Chester Square , Belgravia .
Revised:  Michaels , Chester Square .
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