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Original:  Zheng was the chief conductor of the China National Opera House (CNOH) and she formed and conducted at the Xiamen Philharmonic Orchestra.
Revised:  Zheng was the chief conductor of the China National Opera House (CNOH) , and the music director and conductor of the Xiamen Philharmonic Orchestra.
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Original:  She has also been a Chairman of Conducting Department in the Central Conservatory of Music in Beijing (CCOM).  ]  Biography Zheng  was born in Yongding, Fujian.
Revised:  ] Biography Zheng was born in Yongding, Fujian.
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Original:  Later, Zheng studied at the CCOM in 1952.
Revised:  , but soon left the university and went to the liberated area alone. After Zheng Xiaoying came to the liberated area, he joined the Art Troupe of Central Plains University. In the process of performing for the people, she realized that music must be combined with the needs of the people and serve the people. Because she had studied piano as a young girl and had a musical foundation, she was able to enter the Central Conservatory of Music for further studies in 1952.
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Original:  In 1962 , she was first Chinese conductor to conduct an opera in a foreign setting when she conducted "Tosca" at the Moscow National Theater.
Revised:  In 1962 directed the performance of Puccini's opera "Tosca". Become the first Chinese conductor to conduct an opera in a foreign setting when she conducted "Tosca" at the Moscow National Theater.
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Original:  In 1962 , she was first Chinese conductor to conduct an opera in a foreign setting when she conducted "Tosca" at the Moscow National Theater.
Revised:  In 1962 , she was first Chinese conductor to conduct opera in a foreign setting when she conducted "Tosca" at the Moscow National Theater.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When Zheng retired from the China National Opera in 1997, she moved to Xiamen.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When Zheng retired from the China National Opera in 1997, she moved to Xiamen.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When Zheng retired from the National Opera of China in 1997, she moved to Xiamen.
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Original:  In 1998, she started the Xiamen Philharmonic Orchestra (XPO), a non-State musical ensemble.
Revised:  In 1998, she founded the Xiamen Philharmonic Orchestra (XPO), a non-State musical ensemble.
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Original:  The XPO has grown steadily under her leadership , gaining worldwide recognition.
Revised:  The XPO has grown steadily under her leadership and gained worldwide recognition.
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Original:  Zheng was a torchbearer in Xiamen for the 2008 Olympic Games  .
Revised:  Zheng was the torchbearer of the 2008 Olympic Games .
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Original:  Zheng was a torchbearer in Xiamen for the 2008 Olympic Games  .
Revised:  Zheng was a torchbearer in Xiamen for the 2008 Olympic Games in Xiamen .
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Original:  In 2011, she was honored with the Golden Melody Prize from the Chinese Musicians ' Association.
Revised:  In 2011, she won the Golden Melody Prize from the Chinese Musicians ' Association.
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Original:  Zheng received the 2012 Chinese Cultural Figure title for her contribution to music education and conducting.
Revised:  Zheng received the 2012 Chinese Cultural Figure in 2012 for her contribution to music education and conducting.
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Original:  She retired from the XPO in 2013.
Revised:  She retired from XPO in 2013.
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Original:  In 2014, she was honored by the CNOH with the title "Honorary Conductor for Life . " 
Revised:  In 2014, she was awarded the title of "Honorary Conductor for Life . " 
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Original:  In 2014, she was honored by the CNOH with the title "Honorary Conductor for Life . " 
Revised:  In 2014, she was honored by the CNOH with the title "Honorary Conductor for Life " 
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Original:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% She has also been a Chairman of Conducting Department in the Central Conservatory of Music in Beijing (CCOM). Zheng Xiaoying ( September, 28th 1929 - ), her family was from Yongding, Fujian province, China mainland.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% She has also been a Chairman of Conducting Department in the Central Conservatory of Music in Beijing (CCOM). Zheng Xiaoying ( September, 28th 1929 - ), her family was from Yongding, Fujian province, China mainland.
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Original:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% She has also been a Chairman of Conducting Department in the Central Conservatory of Music in Beijing (CCOM). Zheng Xiaoying ( September, 28th 1929 - ), her family was from Yongding, Fujian province, China mainland.
Revised:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Zheng Xiaoying ( September, 28th 1929 - ), her family was from Yongding, Fujian province, China mainland.
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Original:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% She has also been a Chairman of Conducting Department in the Central Conservatory of Music in Beijing (CCOM). Zheng Xiaoying ( September, 28th 1929 - ), her family was from Yongding, Fujian province, China mainland.
Revised:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% She has also been a Chairman of Conducting Department in the Central Conservatory of Music in Beijing (CCOM). September, 28th 1929 - ), her family was from Yongding, Fujian province, China mainland.
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Original:  It has made a significant contribution to the popularization of classical music in China. 2%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Zheng Xiaoying is also an outstanding music educator.
Revised:  It has made a significant contribution to the popularization of classical music in China. %DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Zheng Xiaoying is also an outstanding music educator.
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Original:  Biography Zheng Xiaoying was born in a family of intellectuals in Shanghai and started to learn piano at the age of 6. After the beginning of the War of Resistance Against Japan, she fled to Sichuan with her parents, where she entered the Primary School for Children of the Political Department of the Air Navigation Commission, and later entered the Huaying Girls' Middle School.
Revised:  Biography Zheng was born in a family of intellectuals in Shanghai and started to learn piano at the age of 6. After the beginning of the War of Resistance Against Japan, she fled to Sichuan with her parents, where she entered the Primary School for Children of the Political Department of the Air Navigation Commission, and later entered the Huaying Girls' Middle School.
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Original:  Become the first Chinese conductor to conduct  opera in a foreign environment.
Revised:  Become the first Chinese conductor to conduct an opera in a foreign environment.
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Original:  During the Cultural Revolution , she was sent to the 38th Army to receive " re-education" . After the reform and opening up, she served as the chief conductorof the Central Opera Troupe.
Revised:  During the Cultural Revolution , she was sent to the 38th Army to receive " . After the reform and opening up, she served as the chief conductorof the Central Opera Troupe.
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Original:  After   Zheng retired from the National Opera of China in 1997, she moved to Xiamen.
Revised:  After When Zheng retired from the National Opera of China in 1997, she moved to Xiamen.
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Original:  After   Zheng retired from the National Opera of China in 1997, she moved to Xiamen.
Revised:  After Zheng retired from the China National Opera in 1997, she moved to Xiamen.
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Original:  In 1998, she founded the Xiamen Philharmonic Orchestra (XPO), a non-national music group.
Revised:  In 1998, she started the Xiamen Philharmonic Orchestra (XPO), a non-national music group.
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Original:  Zheng was the torchbearer of the 2008 Olympic Games in Xiamen .
Revised:  Zheng was the torchbearer of the 2008 Olympic Games .
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Original:  In 2011, she won the Golden Melody Award from the Chinese Musicians Association.
Revised:  In 2011, she was honored with the Golden Melody Award from the Chinese Musicians Association.
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Original:  Ms. Zheng was awarded the title of Chinese Cultural Figure in 2012 for her contribution to music education and conducting.
Revised:  Ms. Zheng was awarded the title of Chinese Cultural Figure title for her contribution to music education and conducting.
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Original:  She retired from  XPO in 2013.
Revised:  She retired from the XPO in 2013.
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Original:  In 2014, she was awarded the title of "Honorary Conductor for Life  " by CNOH.
Revised:  In 2014, she was awarded the title of "Honorary Conductor for Life . " by CNOH.
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Original:  In 2014, she was awarded the title of "Honorary Conductor for Life  " by CNOH.
Revised:  In 2014, she was awarded the title of "Honorary Conductor for Life " 
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Original:  Zheng was the chief conductor of the China National Opera House (CNOH) and she formed and conducted at the Xiamen Philharmonic Orchestra.
Revised:  Zheng was the chief conductor of the China National Opera House (CNOH) and she formed and conducted the Xiamen Philharmonic Orchestra.
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Original:  Biography  Zheng was born in Yongding, Fujian.
Revised:  Biography fd Zheng was born in Yongding, Fujian.
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Original: Biography fd Zheng was born in Yongding, Fujian.
Revised: Biography Zheng was born in Yongding, Fujian.
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Original: The Province of Carolina , commonly known as Carolina, was a province of England (1663–1707) and Great Britain (1707–1712) that existed in North America from 1663 to 1712.
Revised: Carolina was a province of England (1663–1707) and Great Britain (1707–1712) that existed in North America from 1663 to 1712.
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Original:  The Province of Carolina is part of present-day Alabama, Georgia, Mississippi, North Carolina, South Carolina, Tennessee, and The Bahamas.
Revised:  Carolina is part of present-day Alabama, Georgia, Mississippi, North Carolina, South Carolina, Tennessee, and The Bahamas.
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Original: Carolina was a province of England (1663–1707) and Great Britain (1707–1712) that existed in North America  from 1663 until divided into North and South Carolina on January 24, 1712.
Revised: Carolina was a province of England (1663–1707) and Great Britain (1707–1712) that existed in North America from 1663 until divided into North and South on January 24, 1712.
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Original:  Carolina is part of present-day Alabama, Georgia, Mississippi, North Carolina, South Carolina, Tennessee, and The Bahamas.
Revised:  It is part of present-day Alabama, Georgia, Mississippi, North Carolina, South Carolina, Tennessee, and The Bahamas.
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Original: Carolina was a province of England (1663–1707) and Great Britain (1707–1712) that existed in North America and the Caribbean from 1663 until divided into north and south on January 24, 1712.
Revised: Carolina was a province of England (1663–1707) and Great Britain (1707–1712) that existed in North America and the Caribbean from 1663 until divided into North and South on January 24, 1712.
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Original: Carolina was a province of England (1663–1707) and Great Britain (1707–1712) that existed in North America and the Caribbean from 1663 until divided into North and South on January 24, 1712.
Revised: Carolina was a province of England (1663–1707) and Great Britain (1707–1712) that existed in North America and the Caribbean from 1663 until partitioned into North and South on January 24, 1712.
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Original:  The L' Institut mémoires de l'édition contemporaine (IMEC), translated as The memories Institute of contemporary publishing, is a French institution created in 1988 at the initiative of researchers and professionals in French publishing to gather archives and studies related to the main French publishing houses , as well as magazines and the various players in French literary life.
Revised: Interior of IMEC The L' Institut mémoires de l'édition contemporaine (IMEC), translated as The memories Institute of contemporary publishing, is a French institution created in 1988 at the initiative of researchers and professionals in French publishing to gather archives and studies related to the main French publishing houses , as well as magazines and the various players in French literary life.
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Original: File:thumbnail|thumbnail Interior of IMEC The L' Institut mémoires de l'édition contemporaine (IMEC), translated as The memories Institute of contemporary publishing, is a French institution created in 1988 at the initiative of researchers and professionals in French publishing to gather archives and studies related to the main French publishing houses , as well as magazines and the various players in French literary life.
Revised:  Interior of IMEC The L' Institut mémoires de l'édition contemporaine (IMEC), translated as The memories Institute of contemporary publishing, is a French institution created in 1988 at the initiative of researchers and professionals in French publishing to gather archives and studies related to the main French publishing houses , as well as magazines and the various players in French literary life.
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Original:  Interior of IMEC  The L' Institut mémoires de l'édition contemporaine (IMEC), translated as The memories Institute of contemporary publishing, is a French institution created in 1988 at the initiative of researchers and professionals in French publishing to gather archives and studies related to the main French publishing houses , as well as magazines and the various players in French literary life.
Revised:  Interior of IMEC The L' Institut mémoires de l'édition contemporaine (IMEC), translated as The memories Institute of contemporary publishing, is a French institution created in 1988 at the initiative of researchers and professionals in French publishing to gather archives and studies related to the main French publishing houses . It also collects material concerning French magazines and various other players in French literary life.
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Original:  The reading room is open to researchers   
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Original:  Iran's "reform era" is sometimes said to have lasted from 1997 to 2005—the length of  Khatami's two terms in office.
Revised:  Iran's "reform era" is sometimes said to have lasted from 1997 to 2005—the length of President Mohammad Khatami's two terms in office.
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Original: ]] Regia is a classical building type : a place where a governing authority resides.
Revised: ]] Regia is a classical building type , a place where a governing authority resides.
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Original: File:SantIvo_Drawing_06.jpg| Plan of Francesco Borromini's Palazzo della Sapienza ( 1642-1660 ), originally the home of Sapienza University of Rome.
Revised: File:SantIvo_Drawing_06.jpg| upPlan of Francesco Borromini's Palazzo della Sapienza ( 1642-1660 ), originally the home of Sapienza University of Rome.
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Original: File:SantIvo_Drawing_06.jpg| Plan of Francesco Borromini's Palazzo della Sapienza ( 1642-1660 ), originally the home of Sapienza University of Rome.
Revised: File:SantIvo_Drawing_06.jpg| Plan of Francesco Borromini's Palazzo della Sapienza ( 1642–1660 ), originally the home of Sapienza University of Rome.
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Original:  It may also refer to a lifestyle choice or " hobby farm" for those with an independent source of income.
Revised:  It may also refer to a lifestyle choice or " for those with an independent source of income.
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Original:  In parts of Australia, parcels of land of around were allocated by Government to working-class men at nominal rent during the depression of the 1890s with the object of giving them work and, potentially, a source of income.
Revised:  In parts of Australiaunions| depression of the 1890s with the object of giving them work and, potentially, a source of income.
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Original:  Gurunath Vidyanid 
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Original: Waman Thakre is an Indian photographer and a former deputy director of Directorate of Panchayat and Social Service of the Government of Madhya Pradesh.
Revised: Waman Thakre is an Indian photographer and a former deputy director at the Directorate of Panchayat and Social Service of the Government of Madhya Pradesh.
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Original:  ’n Ongewone belegging, Jasmyn, 2001 Alleenvlug, Jasmyn, 2002 Die reuk van verlange, Jasmyn, 2003 Serenade vir ’n nagtegaal, Jasmyn, 2004 Rebecca, Tafelberg, 2004 Hande wat heel, Hartklop, 2005 Met ander woorde, Tafelberg, 2006 Die boek van Ester, Tafelberg, 2008 Vier seisoene kind, Tafelberg, 2010 'n Klein lewe, Tafelberg, 2012 Dubbelspel  , 2014 As Wilmine Burger:
Revised:  ’n Ongewone belegging, Jasmyn, 2001 Alleenvlug, Jasmyn, 2002 Die reuk van verlange, Jasmyn, 2003 Serenade vir ’n nagtegaal, Jasmyn, 2004 Rebecca, Tafelberg, 2004 Hande wat heel, Hartklop, 2005 Met ander woorde, Tafelberg, 2006 Die boek van Ester, Tafelberg, 2008 Vier seisoene kind, Tafelberg, 2010 'n Klein lewe, Tafelberg, 2012 Dubbelspel , Tefelberg , 2014 As Wilmine Burger:
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Original:  ’n Ongewone belegging, Jasmyn, 2001 Alleenvlug, Jasmyn, 2002 Die reuk van verlange, Jasmyn, 2003 Serenade vir ’n nagtegaal, Jasmyn, 2004 Rebecca, Tafelberg, 2004 Hande wat heel, Hartklop, 2005 Met ander woorde, Tafelberg, 2006 Die boek van Ester, Tafelberg, 2008 Vier seisoene kind, Tafelberg, 2010 'n Klein lewe, Tafelberg, 2012 Dubbelspel, Tefelberg , 2014  As Wilmine Burger:
Revised:  ’n Ongewone belegging, Jasmyn, 2001 Alleenvlug, Jasmyn, 2002 Die reuk van verlange, Jasmyn, 2003 Serenade vir ’n nagtegaal, Jasmyn, 2004 Rebecca, Tafelberg, 2004 Hande wat heel, Hartklop, 2005 Met ander woorde, Tafelberg, 2006 Die boek van Ester, Tafelberg, 2008 Vier seisoene kind, Tafelberg, 2010 'n Klein lewe, Tafelberg, 2012 Dubbelspel, Tafelberg , 2014 As Wilmine Burger:
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Original:  ’n Ongewone belegging, Jasmyn, 2001 Alleenvlug, Jasmyn, 2002 Die reuk van verlange, Jasmyn, 2003 Serenade vir ’n nagtegaal, Jasmyn, 2004 Rebecca, Tafelberg, 2004 Hande wat heel, Hartklop, 2005 Met ander woorde, Tafelberg, 2006 Die boek van Ester, Tafelberg, 2008 Vier seisoene kind, Tafelberg, 2010 'n Klein lewe, Tafelberg, 2012 Dubbelspel, Tefelberg , 2014  As Wilmine Burger:
Revised:  ’n Ongewone belegging, Jasmyn, 2001 Alleenvlug, Jasmyn, 2002 Die reuk van verlange, Jasmyn, 2003 Serenade vir ’n nagtegaal, Jasmyn, 2004 Rebecca, Tafelberg, 2004 Hande wat heel, Hartklop, 2005 Met ander woorde, Tafelberg, 2006 Die boek van Ester, Tafelberg, 2008 Vier seisoene kind, Tafelberg, 2010 'n Klein lewe, Tafelberg, 2012 Dubbelspel, Tefelberg , 2014 Eindspel, Tafelberg, 2017 As Wilmine Burger:
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Original: Conventions The NPL holds an annual convention called ConPac , usually in July.
Revised: Conventions The NPL holds an annual convention , usually in July.
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Original:  As of 2013 the organization had about 600 members, of whom about 200 attend the group's convention each year.
Revised:  As of 2013 the organization had about 700 members, of whom about 200 attend the group's convention each year.
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Original: The width from Left Molar to Right MOlar or Measured Molar Value (MMV) can be calculated by using the S.
Revised: The width from Left Molar to Right Molar or Measured Molar Value (MMV) can be calculated by using the S.
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Original:  Maxillary teeth are often missing and Peg Laterals are often seen in the maxillary arch   .
Revised:  Maxillary teeth are often missing and Peg Laterals are often seen in the maxillary arch . .
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Original: United Kingdom In the   United Kingdom in 2013/2014, 133 people were killed at work.
Revised: United Kingdom In the In the United Kingdom in 2013/2014, 133 people were killed at work.
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Original: Common injuries Vehicle accident injury depression As in the United Kingdom, slips, trips and falls (STF) are common and account for 20-40\% of disabling occupational injuries.
Revised: Common injuries As in the United Kingdom, slips, trips and falls (STF) are common and account for 20-40\% of disabling occupational injuries.
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Original:  Oriental Milwaukee Art Museum Oriental Village by the Sea Also the Oriental village by the sea by Basil Al Bayati which "is based upon Oriental building types arranged in a plan originating in patterns of insect and plant life.
Revised:  Oriental Milwaukee Art Museum Also the Oriental village by the sea by Basil Al Bayati which "is based upon Oriental building types arranged in a plan originating in patterns of insect and plant life.
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Original: Some well-known examples of Zoomorphic architecture can be found in the TWA Flight Center building in New York City, by Eero Saarinen, or the Milwaukee Art Museum by Santiago Calatrava, both inspired by the form of a bird’s wings.
Revised: Some well-known examples of zoomorphic architecture can be found in the TWA Flight Center building in New York City, by Eero Saarinen, or the Milwaukee Art Museum by Santiago Calatrava, both inspired by the form of a bird’s wings.
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Original:  Oriental Milwaukee Art Museum Also the Oriental village by the sea by Basil Al Bayati which "is based upon Oriental building types arranged in a plan originating in patterns of insect and plant life.
Revised:  Oriental Milwaukee Art Museum The Oriental village by the sea by Basil Al Bayati which "is based upon Oriental building types arranged in a plan originating in patterns of insect and plant life.
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Original:  Oriental Milwaukee Art Museum The Oriental village by the sea by Basil Al Bayati which "is based upon Oriental building types arranged in a plan originating in patterns of insect and plant life.
Revised:  Oriental Milwaukee Art Museum The Oriental Village by the Sea by Basil Al Bayati which "is based upon Oriental building types arranged in a plan originating in patterns of insect and plant life.
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Original:  Oriental Milwaukee Art Museum The Oriental Village by the Sea by Basil Al Bayati which "is based upon Oriental building types arranged in a plan originating in patterns of insect and plant life.
Revised:  The Oriental Village by the Sea by Basil Al Bayati which "is based upon Oriental building types arranged in a plan originating in patterns of insect and plant life.
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Original: Following the defeat of Napoleon and the loss of Mauritius to Great Britain, the territory would continue to rely upon slave labour until slavery's abolition in the British Empire in the 1830s.
Revised: Following the defeat of Napoleon and the loss of Mauritius to Great Britain, the territory continued to rely upon slave labour until slavery's abolition in the British Empire in the 1830s.
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Original:  This may include medication, exercise, physical therapy,  surgery in rare cases.
Revised:  This may include medication, exercise, physical therapy, and surgery in rare cases.
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Original:  Some therapeutic exercises include:  Low intensity aerobic exercise  Transcutaneous electrical nerve stimulation (TENS) Thermotherapy Proprioceptive neuromuscular facilitation (PNF) Exercise programs, either at home or supervised Hydrotherapy Group exercises;
Revised:  Some therapeutic exercises include: Exercise programs, either at home or supervised Low intensity aerobic exercise Transcutaneous electrical nerve stimulation (TENS) Thermotherapy Proprioceptive neuromuscular facilitation (PNF) Exercise programs, either at home or supervised Hydrotherapy Group exercises;
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