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Original:  His interactive book  Le Grand Bazar, subtitled For people with imagination age 5 to 105 , published in Paris by Edition du Panama , involves using scissors, pen, and stapler.
Revised:  His interactive book Le Grand Bazar, subtitled For people with imagination age 5 to 105 ( published in Paris by Edition du Panama , involves using scissors, pen, and stapler.
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Original:  His interactive book  Le Grand Bazar, subtitled For people with imagination age 5 to 105 , published in Paris by Edition du Panama , involves using scissors, pen, and stapler.
Revised:  His interactive book Le Grand Bazar, subtitled For people with imagination age 5 to 105 , published in Paris by Edition du Panama ), requires the reader to use scissors, pen, and stapler.
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Original:  Boy Meets Girl is to be read forward, backward, upside down , and inside out.
Revised:  Boy Meets Girl is to be read forward, backward, upside down and inside out.
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Original:  For his exhibition at Milanese gallery Nina Due and, subsequently  at the Palazzo delle Esposizioni in Rome, Radunsky presented a unique collection of clothes for animals..
Revised:  For his exhibition at Milanese gallery Nina Due and, subsequently , at the Palazzo delle Esposizioni in Rome, Radunsky presented a unique collection of clothes for animals..
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Original:  Among the works that he designed were  anaconda's wedding dress,  horse's riding breeches, and  hippo's bathing trunks.
Revised:  Among the works that he designed were an anaconda's wedding dress, horse's riding breeches, and hippo's bathing trunks.
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Original:  Among the works that he designed were  anaconda's wedding dress,  horse's riding breeches, and  hippo's bathing trunks.
Revised:  Among the works that he designed were anaconda's wedding dress, a horse's riding breeches, and hippo's bathing trunks.
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Original:  Among the works that he designed were  anaconda's wedding dress,  horse's riding breeches, and  hippo's bathing trunks.
Revised:  Among the works that he designed were anaconda's wedding dress, horse's riding breeches, and a hippo's bathing trunks.
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Original:  For the new production of the ballet Don Quixote at the Roman Teatro dell'Opera's 2017-2018 season  Radunsky created the set and costumes.
Revised:  For the new production of the ballet Don Quixote at the Roman Teatro dell'Opera's 2017-2018 season , Radunsky created the set and costumes.
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Original:  The libretto, originally created in the middle of the XIX century by the French Choreographer Marius Petipa, inspired Radunsky to design the set as an enormous pop-up book.
Revised:  The libretto, originally created in the middle of the nineteenth century by the French Choreographer Marius Petipa, inspired Radunsky to design the set as an enormous pop-up book.
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Original: Vladimir Radunsky ( born 1 March 1954 in Perm, Russia - died 11 September  2018 in Rome, Italy ) was a Russian-born American artist, designer, author and illustrator.
Revised: Vladimir Radunsky ( 1 March 1954 in Perm, Russia - died 11 September 2018 in Rome, Italy ) was a Russian-born American artist, designer, author and illustrator.
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Original: Vladimir Radunsky ( born 1 March 1954 in Perm, Russia - died 11 September  2018 in Rome, Italy ) was a Russian-born American artist, designer, author and illustrator.
Revised: Vladimir Radunsky ( born 1 March 1954 – 11 September 2018 in Rome, Italy ) was a Russian-born American artist, designer, author and illustrator.
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Original: Vladimir Radunsky ( born 1 March 1954 in Perm, Russia - died 11 September  2018 in Rome, Italy ) was a Russian-born American artist, designer, author and illustrator.
Revised: Vladimir Radunsky ( born 1 March 1954 in Perm, Russia - died 11 September 2018 ) was a Russian-born American artist, designer, author and illustrator.
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Original: Bibliography  Mother Goose of Pudding Lane author Chris Raschka 2019, Candlewick Press If I met Bemelmans…
Revised: Bibliography Bibliography Mother Goose of Pudding Lane author Chris Raschka 2019, Candlewick Press If I met Bemelmans…
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Original:  She headed a commission for the inquiry in the 2013 Gujarat surveillance case which ended  before its completion of work following a petition   .
Revised:  She headed a commission for the inquiry in the 2013 Gujarat surveillance case which ended before its completion of work following a petition . .
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Original: Bela Mandhurya Trivedi (born 10 June 1960) is a judge of the Supreme Court of India.
Revised: Bela Mandhurya Trivedi (born 10 June 1960) is a Judge of Supreme Court of India.
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Original:  She formerly served as the Additional Judge of the Gujarat High Court from 17 February 2011 to 27 June 2011 and later served as the Additional Judge of the Rajasthan High Court .
Revised:  She formerly served as the Additional Judge of the Gujarat High Court from 17 February 2011 to 27 June 2011 and later served as the Additional Judge of the Rajasthan High Court 
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Original:  She is a member of General Council of Gujarat National Law University .
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Original: Bela Mandhurya Trivedi (born  10 June 1960) is a Judge of Supreme Court of India.
Revised: Bela Mandhurya Trivedi (born on 10 June 1960) is a Judge of Supreme Court of India.
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Original: Bela Mandhurya Trivedi (born on 10 June 1960) is a Judge of Supreme Court of India.
Revised: Bela Madhurya Trivedi (born on 10 June 1960) is a Judge of Supreme Court of India.
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Original: Du Toit was born on August 25, 1897 in Colesberg .
Revised: Du Toit was born on August 25, 1897 , in Colesberg, South Africa .
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Original:  He died on 17 March , 1961  in Bangkok, Thailand while on a business trip.
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Original:  He died on 17 March , 1961  in Bangkok, Thailand while on a business trip.
Revised:  He died on 17 March , 1961 , in Bangkok, Thailand while on a business trip.
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Original: Francois Jacobus du Toit ( born on August 25 , 1897 in Colesberg, Cape Province, South Africa ) was a South African economist, South Africa's Trade Commissioner in London, UK and Chancellor of the Potchefstroom University for Higher Christian Education Roots Du Toit was born on August 25 , 1897 , in Colesberg , South Africa .
Revised: Francois Jacobus du Toit ( 25 , 1897 in Colesberg, Cape Province, South Africa ) was a South African economist, South Africa's Trade Commissioner in London, UK and Chancellor of the Potchefstroom University for Higher Christian Education Roots Du Toit was born on August 25 , 1897 , in Colesberg , South Africa .
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Original: Francois Jacobus du Toit ( born on August 25 , 1897 in Colesberg, Cape Province, South Africa ) was a South African economist, South Africa's Trade Commissioner in London, UK and Chancellor of the Potchefstroom University for Higher Christian Education Roots Du Toit was born on August 25 , 1897 , in Colesberg , South Africa .
Revised: Francois Jacobus du Toit ( born on August 25 , 1897 in Colesberg, Cape Province, South Africa ) was a South African economist, South Africa's Trade Commissioner in London, UK and Chancellor of the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education. Roots Du Toit was born on August 25 , 1897 , in Colesberg , South Africa .
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Original: Francois Jacobus du Toit ( born on August 25 , 1897 in Colesberg, Cape Province, South Africa ) was a South African economist, South Africa's Trade Commissioner in London, UK and Chancellor of the Potchefstroom University for Higher Christian Education Roots Du Toit was born on August 25 , 1897 , in Colesberg , South Africa .
Revised: Francois Jacobus du Toit ( born on August 25 , 1897 in Colesberg, Cape Province, South Africa ) was a South African economist, South Africa's Trade Commissioner in London, UK and Chancellor of the Potchefstroom University for Higher Christian Education Roots Du Toit was born on 25 , 1897 , in Colesberg , South Africa .
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Original: Francois Jacobus du Toit ( born on August 25 , 1897 in Colesberg, Cape Province, South Africa ) was a South African economist, South Africa's Trade Commissioner in London, UK and Chancellor of the Potchefstroom University for Higher Christian Education Roots Du Toit was born on August 25 , 1897 , in Colesberg , South Africa .
Revised: Francois Jacobus du Toit ( born on August 25 , 1897 in Colesberg, Cape Province, South Africa ) was a South African economist, South Africa's Trade Commissioner in London, UK and Chancellor of the Potchefstroom University for Higher Christian Education Roots Du Toit was born on August 25 , 1897 in Colesberg in the Cape Colony .
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Original:  Francois Jacobus Du Toitis   the father of Laurika Jerling du Toit ;
Revised:  Francois Jacobus Du Toitis the father of Laurika Jerling du Toit ,
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Original:  Anna Sophia Du Plessis du Toit  and Priv Zaaiman Du Toit Brother of Stefanus Du Toit . Education He matriculated from Paarl Gimnasium in 1915 and subsequently obtained BA degrees from the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education and Stellenbosch University.
Revised:  Anna Sophia Du Plessis du Toit , and Priv Zaaiman Du Toit Brother of Stefanus Du Toit . Education He matriculated from Paarl Gimnasium in 1915 and subsequently obtained BA degrees from the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education and Stellenbosch University.
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Original:  Anna Sophia Du Plessis du Toit  and Priv Zaaiman Du Toit Brother of Stefanus Du Toit . Education He matriculated from Paarl Gimnasium in 1915 and subsequently obtained BA degrees from the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education and Stellenbosch University.
Revised:  Anna Sophia Du Plessis du Toit and Priv Zaaiman Du Toit . Education He matriculated from Paarl Gimnasium in 1915 and subsequently obtained BA degrees from the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education and Stellenbosch University.
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Original:  Anna Sophia Du Plessis du Toit  and Priv Zaaiman Du Toit Brother of Stefanus Du Toit . Education He matriculated from Paarl Gimnasium in 1915 and subsequently obtained BA degrees from the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education and Stellenbosch University.
Revised:  Anna Sophia Du Plessis du Toit and Priv Zaaiman Du Toit Brother of Stefanus Du Toit . He matriculated from Paarl Gimnasium in 1915 and subsequently obtained BA degrees from the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education and Stellenbosch University.
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Original:  After being a senior economist in the Agricultural department, in 1939 du Toit became South Africa’s trade commissioner in London, UK   Chancellor  In 1954, he was appointed as Chancellor of The Potchefstroom Universityfor Christian Higher Education , a position in which he remained until 1961.
Revised:  After being a senior economist in the Agricultural department, in 1939 du Toit became South Africa’s trade commissioner in London, UK Chancellor In 1954, he was appointed as Chancellor of the Potchefstroom University , a position in which he remained until 1961.
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Original:  He fought hard for the expansion of research at the university.
Revised:  During his tenure he promoted the expansion of research at the university.
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Original:   Recognition Honorary doctorate was awarded to him by the Potchefstroom university A Building on Potchefstroom University campus is named after him , it is called the Frans du Toit Building and was opened 18 February 1966.
Revised:  Recognition Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university A Building on Potchefstroom University campus is named after him , it is called the Frans du Toit Building and was opened 18 February 1966.
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Original:   Recognition Honorary doctorate was awarded to him by the Potchefstroom university A Building on Potchefstroom University campus is named after him , it is called the Frans du Toit Building and was opened 18 February 1966.
Revised:  Recognition Honorary doctorate was awarded to him by the Potchefstroom university A Building on Potchefstroom University campus is named after him and opened on 18 February 1966.
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Original:   Recognition Honorary doctorate was awarded to him by the Potchefstroom university A Building on Potchefstroom University campus is named after him , it is called the Frans du Toit Building and was opened 18 February 1966.
Revised:  Recognition Honorary doctorate was awarded to him by the Potchefstroom university A Building on Potchefstroom University campus is named after him , it is called the Frans du Toit Building and was opened 18 February 1966
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Original:  Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa, is named after him Frans du Toit - prize awarded by " Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns " (an organization that exists out of high qualified academics) for the person who shows the best Business Leadership is named as recognition to him .
Revised:  Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa, is named after him Frans du Toit - prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns " (an organization that exists out of high qualified academics) for the person who shows the best Business Leadership is named as recognition to him .
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Original:  Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa, is named after him Frans du Toit - prize awarded by " Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns " (an organization that exists out of high qualified academics) for the person who shows the best Business Leadership is named as recognition to him .
Revised:  Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa, is named after him Frans du Toit - prize awarded by " Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him
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Original: Du Toit was born on 25 August 1897 in Colesberg in the Cape Colony.
Revised: Du Toit was born on 25 August 1897 in Colesberg , Cape Colony.
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Original:  In the same year he was sent to London to represent South Africa as assistant Trade Commissioner.
Revised:  In the same year he was sent to London to represent South Africa as Assistant Trade Commissioner.
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Original:  He also became the founder and first chair of the South African Wool Grower' s Association and well as various other agricultural associations.
Revised:  He also became the founder and first chair of the South African Wool Growers' Association and well as various other agricultural associations.
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Original:  Between 1939-1943 he was Deputy High Commissioner and Secretary in the South Africa House in London.
Revised:  Between 1939 and 1943 he was Deputy High Commissioner and Secretary in the South Africa House in London.
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Original:  Du Toit was a board member of various privately owned companies such as Sanlam, Federale Volksbeleggings , and the Nasionale Bouvereniging and was also a founding member of the Suid-Afrikastigting .
Revised:  Du Toit was a board member of various privately owned companies such as Sanlam, Federale Volk Beleggings , and the Nasionale Bouvereniging and was also a founding member of the Suid-Afrikastigting .
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Original:  Du Toit was a board member of various privately owned companies such as Sanlam, Federale Volksbeleggings , and the Nasionale Bouvereniging and was also a founding member of the Suid-Afrikastigting .
Revised:  Du Toit was a board member of various privately owned companies such as Sanlam, Federale Volksbeleggings , and the Nasionale Bouvereniging and was also a founding member of the Suid-Afrika Stigting .
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Original:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university in 1954 The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966 Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa , is named after him  Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him 
Revised:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom University in 1954. The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966 Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa , is named after him Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him 
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Original:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university in 1954 The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966 Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa , is named after him  Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him 
Revised:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university in 1954 The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966. Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa , is named after him Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him 
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Original:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university in 1954 The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966 Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa , is named after him  Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him 
Revised:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university in 1954 The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966 Frans du Toit High School in Phalaborwa is named after him Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him 
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Original:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university in 1954 The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966 Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa , is named after him  Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him 
Revised:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university in 1954 The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966 Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa , is named after him . The Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him 
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Original:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university in 1954 The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966 Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa , is named after him  Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him 
Revised:  Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom university in 1954 The Frans du Toit Building at Potchefstroom University was named after him and opened on 18 February 1966 Frans du Toit High school in Phalaborwa , is named after him Frans du Toit prize awarded by Die Suid-Afrikaanse Akademie vir Wetenskap en Kuns for business leadership is named after him .
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Original: Awarded a honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom University in 1954.
Revised: Awarded an honorary doctorate by the Potchefstroom University in 1954.
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Original:  superseded since approvedAfricanSusanne Schödel (GER)GlidingDOFree triangle distance 1110 ,4 km 31 Dec 2013Ratified - current recordAfricanSusanne Schödel (GER)GlidingDOSpeed over a triangular course of 500 km 139,20 km/h03 Jan 2014Ratified - superseded since approvedAfricanSusanne Schödel (GER)GlidingDOFree distance using up to 3 turn points 1161,4 km27 Dec 2017Ratified - current recordAfrican
Revised:  superseded since approvedAfricanSusanne Schödel (GER)GlidingDOFree triangle distance1110 ,4 km 31 Dec 2013Ratified - current recordAfricanSusanne Schödel (GER)GlidingDOSpeed over a triangular course of 500 km 139,20 km/h03 Jan 2014Ratified - superseded since approvedAfricanSusanne Schödel (GER)GlidingDOFree distance using up to 3 turn points 1161,4 km27 Dec 2017Ratified - current recordAfrican
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Original: 2010 record flight Susanne Schoedel's palm tree and plate The geography and geology of the Kalahari Desert and this part of Africa, create unique conditions for thermals, which allow the naturally powered gliders to fly at higher altitudes, for longer length of time, at various velocities.
Revised:  The geography and geology of the Kalahari Desert and this part of Africa, create unique conditions for thermals, which allow the naturally powered gliders to fly at higher altitudes, for longer length of time, at various velocities.
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Original:  She holds  pilot license for engine powered aircraft, nevertheless soaring in synk with wind and thermals gives her the opportunity to optimize her skills and techniques, either during relaxing weekends, in contests or when record flying.
Revised:  She holds a pilot license for engine powered aircraft, nevertheless soaring in synk with wind and thermals gives her the opportunity to optimize her skills and techniques, either during relaxing weekends, in contests or when record flying.
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Original:  She holds  pilot license for engine powered aircraft, nevertheless soaring in synk with wind and thermals gives her the opportunity to optimize her skills and techniques, either during relaxing weekends, in contests or when record flying.
Revised:  She holds pilot license for engine-powered aircraft. Soaring in sync with wind and thermals gives her the opportunity to optimize her skills and techniques, either during relaxing weekends, in contests or when record flying.
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Original:  Career Academic background in Political Science , Schödel’s professional career spans in various sectors, from being Managing Director at Susan G. Komen for the Cure e.V. Germany, to public sector, having worked for governmental institutions in Germany.
Revised:  Career Academic background in Political Science . Her professional career spans in various sectors, from being Managing Director at Susan G. Komen for the Cure e.V. Germany, to public sector, having worked for governmental institutions in Germany.
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Original:  Career Academic background in Political Science , Schödel’s professional career spans in various sectors, from being Managing Director at Susan G. Komen for the Cure e.V. Germany, to public sector, having worked for governmental institutions in Germany.
Revised:  Career Academic background in Political Science , Schödel’s professional career spans various sectors, from being Managing Director at Susan G. Komen for the Cure e.V. Germany, to public sector, having worked for governmental institutions in Germany.
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Original:  Since 2014  Susanne Schödel is Secretary General of Fédération Aéronautique Internationale, World Air Sports Federation (FAI).
Revised:  Since 2014 , Susanne Schödel is Secretary General of Fédération Aéronautique Internationale, World Air Sports Federation (FAI).
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Original:  Since 2014  Susanne Schödel is Secretary General of Fédération Aéronautique Internationale, World Air Sports Federation (FAI).
Revised:  Since 2014 Susanne Schödel has been Secretary General of Fédération Aéronautique Internationale, World Air Sports Federation (FAI).
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