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Original:  He posted a message to his own forum and some forum visitor gave him a method to verify what he found : randomly choosing a website URL that is in China and adding banned keywords to that URL  . Take URL for example, if you use that URL to link to the site when you are outside China, you will find the server connection will suddenly to be resetand will not show the normal "page does not exist" error message .
Revised:  He posted a message to his own forum and some forum visitor gave him a method to verify what he found : randomly choosing a website URL that is in China and adding banned keywords to that URL , the server connection will be reset without displaying the normal "page does not exist" error message . Take URL for example, if you use that URL to link to the site when you are outside China, you will find the server connection will suddenly to be resetand will not show the normal "page does not exist" error message .
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Original:  He posted a message to his own forum and some forum visitor gave him a method to verify what he found : randomly choosing a website URL that is in China and adding banned keywords to that URL  . Take URL for example, if you use that URL to link to the site when you are outside China, you will find the server connection will suddenly to be resetand will not show the normal "page does not exist" error message .
Revised:  He posted a message to his own forum and some forum visitor gave him a method to verify what he found : randomly choosing a website URL that is in China and adding banned keywords to that URL . Take URL for example, if you use that URL to link to the site when you are outside China, you will find the server connection will be reset .
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Original: In May 12 Radio Free Asia reported some people outside China will get a "server connection has been reset" error message when they are trying to search some political keywords on Baidupedia.
Revised: On May 12 Radio Free Asia reported some people outside China will get a "server connection has been reset" error message when they are trying to search some political keywords on Baidupedia.
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Original:  Baidupeida that went online this April is a service that provided by the Chinese Internet search company, Baidu, and its form is very similar to Wikipedia that has been blocked by the PRC government  last year.
Revised:  Baidupeida that went online this April is a service that provided by the Chinese Internet search company, Baidu, and its form is very similar to Wikipedia , which is blocked by the PRC government last year.
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Original: In a press conference an emotional Ayaan Hirsi Ali announced that she will leave parliament and she has announced that she will become fellow at the conservative think tank American Enterprise Institute in September after reaching a deal with US authorities about her security.
Revised: In a press conference an emotional Ayaan Hirsi Ali announced that she will leave parliament and move to the United States to work with the conservative think tank American Enterprise Institute in September after reaching a deal with US authorities about her security.
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Original: In a press conference an emotional Ayaan Hirsi Ali announced that she will leave parliament and she has announced that she will become fellow at the conservative think tank American Enterprise Institute in September after reaching a deal with US authorities about her security.
Revised: In a press conference an emotional Ayaan Hirsi Ali announced that she will leave parliament and she has announced that she will become fellow at the conservative think tank American Enterprise Institute in September after reaching a deal with US authorities concerning her security.
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Original:  Originally she wouldn't have moved to the USA until next year may.
Revised:  Originally she was to have moved to the USA until next year may.
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Original:  She had already informed the public about these facts as early as September 2002 in an interview in the political magazine HP/De Tijd.
Revised:  She had already informed the public of these aspects of the story of her immigration to the Netherlands as early as September 2002 in an interview in the political magazine HP/De Tijd.
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Original:  Prime Minister :w:nl: Jan -Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer  part of an eventual next administration
Revised:  Prime Minister :w:nl: Jan-Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer part of an eventual next administration
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Original:  Prime Minister :w:nl: Jan -Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer  part of an eventual next administration
Revised:  Prime Minister :w:nl: Jan -Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer be part of an eventual next administration
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Original:  Prime Minister :w:nl: Jan-Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer be part of an eventual next administration
Revised:  Prime Minister Jan-Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer be part of an eventual next administration
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Original:  She also lied about her name and date of birth.
Revised:  She changed her name and date of birth.
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Original:  She stated that she was Ayaan Hirsi Ali, born in 1967, but she's actually Ayaan Hirsi Magan, born in 1969.
Revised:  She pretended to be Ayaan Hirsi Ali, born in 1967, but she's actually Ayaan Hirsi Magan, born in 1969.
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Original:  She stated that she was Ayaan Hirsi Ali, born in 1967, but she's actually Ayaan Hirsi Magan, born in 1969.
Revised:  She stated that she was Ayaan Hirsi Ali, born in 1967, but official records say Ayaan Hirsi Magan, born in 1969.
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Original:  Therefore the Dutch government 's position is that Hirsi Ali never received Dutch citizenship.
Revised:  Therefore the Dutch government 's position was that Hirsi Ali never received Dutch citizenship.
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Original:  Prime Minister Jan-Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer be part of an eventual next administration
Revised:  Prime Minister Jan-Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer be part of a next administration
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Original:  Friday, May 19 will be a discussion in the 2e Kamer about the consequences of this dilemma following the ministers assembly one day earlier.
Revised:  Prime Minister
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Original:  Jan Peter Balkenende stated that  VVD will possibly no longer be part of a next administration . Piet Hein Donner - Minister of Justice stated the cost of protection of AHA in the States would not be paid anymore although according to the lawers of Hirsi the Dutch State prior said they would always continue do so no matter where she is
Revised:  Jan Peter Balkenende stated that the VVD will possibly no longer be part of a next administration . Piet Hein Donner - Minister of Justice stated the cost of protection of AHA in the States would not be paid anymore although according to the lawers of Hirsi the Dutch State prior said they would always continue do so no matter where she is
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Original:  Jan Peter Balkenende stated that  VVD will possibly no longer be part of a next administration . Piet Hein Donner - Minister of Justice stated the cost of protection of AHA in the States would not be paid anymore although according to the lawers of Hirsi the Dutch State prior said they would always continue do so no matter where she is
Revised:  Jan Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer be part of a next administration Piet Hein Donner - Minister of Justice stated the cost of protection of AHA in the States would not be paid anymore although according to the lawers of Hirsi the Dutch State prior said they would always continue do so no matter where she is
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Original:  Jan Peter Balkenende stated that  VVD will possibly no longer be part of a next administration . Piet Hein Donner - Minister of Justice stated the cost of protection of AHA in the States would not be paid anymore although according to the lawers of Hirsi the Dutch State prior said they would always continue do so no matter where she is
Revised:  Jan Peter Balkenende stated that VVD will possibly no longer be part of a next administration . 
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Original:  This is a statistic we need to improve upon " Category:California Category:United States Category:North America Category:Educati
Revised:  This is a statistic we need to improve upon Category:California Category:United States Category:North America Category:Educati
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Original:  This is a statistic we need to improve upon " Category:California Category:United States Category:North America Category:Educati
Revised:  This is a statistic we need to improve upon " 
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Original:  "The restoration of funding to Califoria school districts is very positive news,” New Haven schools Superintendent Pat Jaurequi told the James Logan Courier.
Revised:  "The restoration of funding to California school districts is very positive news,” New Haven schools Superintendent Pat Jaurequi told the James Logan Courier.
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Original:  ” “ This is a good thing for our schools and community colleges throughout California, ” said Barbara E. Kerr, president of the California Teachers Association, one of the parties to the lawsuit.
Revised:  " “ This is a good thing for our schools and community colleges throughout California, ” said Barbara E. Kerr, president of the California Teachers Association, one of the parties to the lawsuit.
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Original:  ” “ This is a good thing for our schools and community colleges throughout California, ” said Barbara E. Kerr, president of the California Teachers Association, one of the parties to the lawsuit.
Revised:  ” " This is a good thing for our schools and community colleges throughout California, ” said Barbara E. Kerr, president of the California Teachers Association, one of the parties to the lawsuit.
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Original:  ” “ This is a good thing for our schools and community colleges throughout California, ” said Barbara E. Kerr, president of the California Teachers Association, one of the parties to the lawsuit.
Revised:  ” “ This is a good thing for our schools and community colleges throughout California, " said Barbara E. Kerr, president of the California Teachers Association, one of the parties to the lawsuit.
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Original:  This is a statistic we need to improve upon 
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Original: "An inventory of all the baryons in stars and gas inside and outside of galaxies accounts for just over half the baryons that existed shortly after the Big Bang," Fabrizio Nicastro of the URL Harvard-Smithsonian Center for Astrophysics . "Now we have found the likely hiding place of the missing baryons."
Revised: "An inventory of all the baryons in stars and gas inside and outside of galaxies accounts for just over half the baryons that existed shortly after the Big Bang," Fabrizio Nicastro of the Harvard-Smithsonian Center for Astrophysics . "Now we have found the likely hiding place of the missing baryons."
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Original: Scientists studying data from the Chandra X-ray telescope have found strong evidence of the missing half of the ordinary matter of the universe.
Revised: Scientists studying data from the Chandra X-ray telescope have found strong evidence of the missing half of ordinary matter in the universe.
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Original:  Two immense intergalactic clouds confirm the existence of a cosmic web of hot gas, predicted by computer simulations, containing baryons , the ordinary matter of the universe .
Revised:  Two immense intergalactic clouds confirm the existence of a cosmic web of hot gas, predicted by computer simulations, containing baryons .
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Original: Scientists studying data from the Chandra X-ray telescope have found strong evidence of the missing half of ordinary matter in the universe.
Revised: Scientists studying data from the Chandra X-ray telescope have found strong evidence for the missing half of ordinary matter in the universe.
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Original: With more than two-thirds of the 3.3 million votes counted , the Shia List has a considerable lead over interim Iraqi Prime Minister Iyad Allawi's Iraqi National List which trails with approximately 17\% of the current vote counts.
Revised: With more than two-thirds of the 3.3 million votes counted , the Shia List has a considerable lead over interim Iraqi Prime Minister Iyad Allawi's Iraqi List which trails with approximately 17\% of the current vote counts.
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Original: February 4, 2005 200px|Iraqi voters lining up to take part in the 2005 Iraqi National Assembly election.
Revised:  200px|Iraqi voters lining up to take part in the 2005 Iraqi National Assembly election.
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Original: 200px|Iraqi voters lining up to take part in the 2005 Iraqi National Assembly election.
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Original:  There have been no reported injuries or deaths   
Revised:  There have been no reported injuries or deaths . 
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Original: The BBC today unveiled it's plans for a new iMP player with which people in the UK will be able to download any  tv or radio programme  a week after it has been broadcast in the UK.
Revised: The BBC today unveiled it's plans for a new iMP player with which people in the UK will be able to download any tv or radio programme for a week after it has been broadcast in the UK.
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Original:  The latter include the species of the capuchin monkeys (Cebinae), a tool using species that passes the mirror test    
Revised:  The latter include the species of the capuchin monkeys (Cebinae), a tool using species that passes the mirror test experiment. 
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Original: Spain’s Socialist Workers' Party (PSOE)  proposed a bill to grant some human rights to the great apes (Hominidae), which include the chimpanzees, gorillas and orang-utans.
Revised: Spain’s Socialist Workers' Party (PSOE) proposed a bill to grant some human rights to all great apes (Hominidae), which include the chimpanzees, gorillas and orang-utans.
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Original:  Humanity shares 96.4 \% of its genome with the chimpanzees, 97.7\% with the gorillas and 96.4\% with the orang-utans .
Revised:  Humanity shares about 97 \% of its genome with the chimpanzees, 97.7\% with the gorillas and 96.4\% with the orang-utans .
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Original:  The bill was submitted by Francisco Garrido, a member of the Confederación de Los Verdes, the spanish green party, and is inspired by the Declaration on Great Apes published by the Great Ape Project.
Revised:  The proposal was submitted by Francisco Garrido, a member of the Confederación de Los Verdes, the spanish green party, and is inspired by the Declaration on Great Apes published by the Great Ape Project.
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Original:  The bill does not grant the lesser apes gibbons (Hylobates) and siamangs (Symphalangus) or the new world anthropoids (Platyrrhines) similar rights.
Revised:  The proposal does not assign the lesser apes gibbons (Hylobates) and siamangs (Symphalangus) or the new world anthropoids (Platyrrhines) similar rights.
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Original:  The bill does not grant the lesser apes gibbons (Hylobates) and siamangs (Symphalangus) or the new world anthropoids (Platyrrhines) similar rights.
Revised:  The bill does not grant the lesser apes gibbons (Hylobates) , siamangs (Symphalangus) or the new world anthropoids (Platyrrhines) similar rights.
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Original: Mike Wallace Interviews 1957 Retired television correspondent , who was probably most known for his tough interviews, died April 7, at Waveny Care Center in , , surrounded by his family.
Revised:  Retired television correspondent , who was probably most known for his tough interviews, died April 7, at Waveny Care Center in , , surrounded by his family.
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Original: Retired television correspondent , who was probably most known for his tough interviews , died April 7, at Waveny Care Center in , , surrounded by his family.
Revised: Retired television correspondent , known for his tough interviews , died April 7, at Waveny Care Center in , , surrounded by his family.
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Original: Retired television correspondent , who was probably most known for his tough interviews , died April 7, at Waveny Care Center in , , surrounded by his family.
Revised: Retired television correspondent , who was probably most known for his tough interviewing style , died April 7, at Waveny Care Center in , , surrounded by his family.
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Original: Wallace had interviewed many notables including former president , , , former first lady and former president .
Revised: Wallace interviewed many notables including former president , , , former first lady and former president .
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Original:  He worked for the CBS News magazine show for almost 40 years and announced he would step down in 2006, but still did interviews sparingly.
Revised:  He worked for the CBS News magazine show for almost 40 years and announced he would step down in 2006, and subsequently interviewed for the program sparingly.
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Original:  Westmoreland sued CBS and Wallace for $120 million, but later dropped the lawsuit.
Revised:  Westmoreland sued CBS and Wallace for $120 million, and later dropped the lawsuit.
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Original:  The trial pushed Wallace into clinical depression and he admitted in a 2006 "60 Minutes" tribute to himself, that he had attempted suicide by overdosing.
Revised:  The trial pushed Wallace into clinical depression and he admitted in a 2006 "60 Minutes" tribute to himself, that he attempted suicide by overdosing.
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Original:  He also appeared in a 1998 documentary about called "Dead Blue."
Revised:  He appeared in a 1998 documentary about called "Dead Blue."
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Original:  Wallace then married actress which also ended in divorce.
Revised:  Wallace then married actress which ended in divorce.
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Original: Wallace interviewed many notables including former president , , , former first lady and former president .
Revised: Wallace interviewed many famous people including former president , , , former first lady and former president .
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Original:  Westmoreland sued CBS  and Wallace for $120 million, and later dropped the lawsuit.
Revised:  Westmoreland sued CBS () and Wallace for $120 million, and later dropped the lawsuit.
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Original:  The company also announced a quarterly dividend of 50 cents per share which is to be payable on March 1, 2005, to stockholders of record at the close of business Feb. 15, 2005.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Announces Share Repurchase Program And Declares Quarterly Dividend - Company Press Release - 4 Feb 2005 Conoco plans 1 bln share buyback - Marketwatch Wire Service - 4 Feb 2005
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Announces Share Repurchase Program And Declares Quarterly Dividend - Company Press Release - 4 Feb 2005 Conoco plans 1 bln share buyback - Marketwatch Wire Service - 4 Feb 2005
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Original: Prior to his new appointment, Bishop Wuerl had oversaw the over 800,000 Catholics in the Pittsburgh community for the last 18 years.
Revised: Prior to his new appointment, Bishop Wuerl had overseen the over 800,000 Catholics in the Pittsburgh community for the last 18 years.
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Original:  The Archbishop of Washington is traditionally a Cardinal, so there is the possibility that Wuerl will soon be elevated to Cardinal status    ]   [  [   ]  ]   [  [  
Revised:  The Archbishop of Washington is traditionally a Cardinal, so there is the possibility that Wuerl will soon be elevated to Cardinal status . ] [ [ ] ] [ [ 
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Original:  The Archbishop of Washington is traditionally a Cardinal, so there is the possibility that Wuerl will soon be elevated to Cardinal status . 50 CENT LYRICS%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "I'll Whip Ya Head Boy" (feat.
Revised:  The Archbishop of Washington is traditionally a Cardinal, so there is the possibility that Wuerl will soon be elevated to Cardinal status 50 CENT LYRICS%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "I'll Whip Ya Head Boy" (feat.
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Original:  The Archbishop of Washington is traditionally a Cardinal, so there is the possibility that Wuerl will soon be elevated to Cardinal status . 50 CENT LYRICS%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "I'll Whip Ya Head Boy" (feat.
Revised:  The Archbishop of Washington is traditionally a Cardinal, so there is the possibility that Wuerl will soon be elevated to Cardinal status . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "I'll Whip Ya Head Boy" (feat.
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Original:  50 Cent Chorus%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% I'll Whip Your Head Boy,
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% I'll Whip Your Head Boy,
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Original:  you know I will I'll Whip Your Head Boy, with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, you know I will I'll Whip Your Head Boy, with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [%%% 50 Cent Verse 2 niggaz in the front, 2 niggaz in the back Thats 4 niggaz ridin'
Revised:  you know I will I'll Whip Your Head Boy, with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [%%% 50 Cent Verse 2 niggaz in the front, 2 niggaz in the back Thats 4 niggaz ridin'
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Original:  you know I will I'll Whip Your Head Boy, with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, you know I will I'll Whip Your Head Boy, with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [%%% 50 Cent Verse 2 niggaz in the front, 2 niggaz in the back Thats 4 niggaz ridin'
Revised:  you know I will I'll Whip Your Head Boy, with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, you know I will I'll Whip Your Head Boy, with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [%%% 2 niggaz in the front, 2 niggaz in the back Thats 4 niggaz ridin'
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Original:  man niggaz know who I iz I got a full clip and niggaz know I get biz%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [%%% 50 Cent Chorus I'll Whip Your Head Boy,
Revised:  man niggaz know who I iz I got a full clip and niggaz know I get biz%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [%%% I'll Whip Your Head Boy,
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Original:  with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% I'll Whip Your Head Boy, you know I will I'll Whip Your Head Boy, with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed 50 Cent Verse%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% I'm up early in the mornin', tryna make a move Come in here with me shorty take your lil'
Revised:  with the back of the steal I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your cap could get pealed I'll Whip Your Head Boy, your ass could get killed%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 50 Cent Verse%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %%% I'm up early in the mornin', tryna make a move Come in here with me shorty take your lil'
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