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Original:  Recreational fishing%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Louis John Rhead - Izaak Wolton and his scholar.jpg|upIzaak Walton's Compleat Angler, published in 1653 helped popularise fly fishing as a sport.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Ustonson advert.jpg|Trading card of the Ustonson company, an early firm specializing in fishing equipment, and holder of a Royal Warrant from the 1760s.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% British fly-fishing continued to develop in the 19th Century, with the emergence of fly fishing clubs, along with the appearance of several books on the subject of fly tying and fly fishing techniques.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The development of inexpensive fiberglass rods, synthetic fly lines, and monofilament leaders in the early 1950s, that revived the popularity of fly fishing.
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Original:  Techniques Fishermen with traditional fish traps, Vietnam%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There are many fishing techniques and tactics for catching fish.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Fishing tackle refers to the physical equipment that is used when fishing, whereas fishing techniques refers to the ways the tackle is used when fishing.
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Original:  Modern fisheries management is often referred to as a governmental system of (hopefully appropriate) management rules based on defined objectives and a mix of management means to implement the rules, which are put in place by a system of monitoring control and surveillance.
Revised:  Modern fisheries management is often referred to as a governmental system of (hopefully appropriate) management rules based on defined objectives and a mix of management means to 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sustainability%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Issues involved in the long term sustainability of fishing include overfishing, by-catch, marine pollution, environmental effects of fishing, climate change and fish farming.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Issues involved in the long term sustainability of fishing include overfishing, by-catch, marine pollution, environmental effects of fishing, climate change and fish farming.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sustainability%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Issues involved in the long term sustainability of fishing include overfishing, by-catch, marine pollution, environmental effects of fishing, climate change and fish farming.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Similar to other environmental issues, there can be conflict between the fishermen who depend on fishing for their livelihoods and fishery scientists who realise that if future fish populations are to be sustainable then some fisheries must limit fishing or cease operations.
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Original: Recreational fishing File:Louis John Rhead - Izaak Wolton and his scholar.jpg|upIzaak Walton's Compleat Angler, published in 1653 helped popularise fly fishing as a sport.
Revised:  File:Louis John Rhead - Izaak Wolton and his scholar.jpg|upIzaak Walton's Compleat Angler, published in 1653 helped popularise fly fishing as a sport.
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Original:  File:Ustonson advert.jpg|Trading card of the Ustonson company, an early firm specializing in fishing equipment, and holder of a Royal Warrant from the 1760s.
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Original:  British fly-fishing continued to develop in the 19th Century, with the emergence of fly fishing clubs, along with the appearance of several books on the subject of fly tying and fly fishing techniques.
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Original: The Wilbur Cross Medal,  Wilbur Lucius Cross Medal, is an award by the Yale Alumni Association for "distinguished achievements in scholarship, teaching, academic administration, and public service".
Revised: The Wilbur Cross Medal, or Wilbur Lucius Cross Medal, is an award by the Yale Alumni Association for "distinguished achievements in scholarship, teaching, academic administration, and public service".
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Original: "Wilbur Cross Medal", Yale University Retrieved 04 October 2014From the Hill Albertus Magnus College Allumni Association 2002 The award is made to a small number of individuals (up to six) annually, and was first awarded in 1966.
Revised: "Wilbur Cross Medal", Yale University Retrieved 04 October 2014From the Hill Albertus Magnus College Alumni Association 2002 The award is made to a small number of individuals (up to six) annually, and was first awarded in 1966.
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Original: Herpetic simplex keratitis , also known as herpetic keratoconjunctivitis and herpesviral keratitis, is a form of keratitis caused by recurrent herpes simplex virus (HSV) infection in the cornea.
Revised: Herpetic simplex keratitis is a form of keratitis caused by recurrent herpes simplex virus (HSV) infection in the cornea.
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Original:  Fluorescein-stained cornea: geographic epithelial defects In immune deficient patients or with the use of corticosteroids the ulcer may become large and in these cases it is called geographic ulcer.
Revised:  In immune deficient patients or with the use of corticosteroids the ulcer may become large and in these cases it is called geographic ulcer.
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Original:  He was one of the most successful business persons in post-Independence Pakistan.
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Original:  It was renamed as Dawood University of Engineering & Technology after being granted the status of a university in 2013.
Revised:  It was renamed as Dawood University of Engineering & Technology after being granted the status of a university in 2013).
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Original: Awards Ahmed Dawood received numerous awards for his outstanding performance in different walks of life including economy, finance, education, and social welfare.
Revised: Awards Dawood received awards for achievements in areas including economy, finance, education, and social welfare.
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Original: Social and Welfare Services 350px| Ahmed Dawood at work , in the late 1980s .
Revised: Social and welfare services 350px| Ahmed Dawood at work , in the late 1980s .
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Original: Social and Welfare Services 350px| Ahmed Dawood at work , in the late 1980s .
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Original: Social and Welfare Services 350px| Ahmed Dawood at work , in the late 1980s .
Revised: Social and Welfare Services 350px| Ahmed Dawood at work in the late 1980s .
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Original:  In 1950, under his leadership, he created the Dawood Trust to provide scholarships and financial help for deserving students and educational institutions.
Revised:  In 1950, he created the Dawood Trust to provide scholarships and financial help for deserving students and educational institutions.
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Original:  In 1950, under his leadership, he created the Dawood Trust to provide scholarships and financial help for deserving students and educational institutions.
Revised:  In 1950, under his leadership, he created the Dawood Trust to provide scholarships and financial help for students and educational institutions.
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Original:  He decided to transform the Trust into an educational Foundation, which got registered in February 1960 as The Dawood Foundation (TDF) .
Revised:  He transformed the Trust into an educational Foundation, which got registered in February 1960 as The Dawood Foundation (TDF) .
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Original:  He decided to transform the Trust into an educational Foundation, which got registered in February 1960 as The Dawood Foundation (TDF) .
Revised:  He decided to transform the Trust into an educational Foundation, which became The Dawood Foundation (TDF) .
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Original:  In 1983, he founded the Dawood Public School , which is situated in Karachi’ s Dawood Colony.
Revised:  In 1983, he founded the Dawood Public School in Karachi' s Dawood Colony.
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Original:  Dawood always considered education as a top priority, which is evident by the fact that his own children and those from his larger family were all send for best schooling to the UK . They all further received academic education at some of the most prestigious universities in the UK and the US at the time .
Revised:  Dawood 's children and those from his larger family were all send for best schooling to the UK . They all further received academic education at some of the most prestigious universities in the UK and the US at the time .
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Original:  Dawood always considered education as a top priority, which is evident by the fact that his own children and those from his larger family were all send for best schooling to the UK . They all further received academic education at some of the most prestigious universities in the UK and the US at the time .
Revised:  Dawood always considered education as a top priority, which is evident by the fact that his own children and those from his extended family all went abroad to the UK . They all further received academic education at some of the most prestigious universities in the UK and the US at the time .
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Original:  Dawood always considered education as a top priority, which is evident by the fact that his own children and those from his larger family were all send for best schooling to the UK . They all further received academic education at some of the most prestigious universities in the UK and the US at the time .
Revised:  Dawood always considered education as a top priority, which is evident by the fact that his own children and those from his larger family were all send for best schooling to the UK for schooling and to prestigious universities in the UK and the US at the time .
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Original:  Dawood always considered education as a top priority, which is evident by the fact that his own children and those from his larger family were all send for best schooling to the UK . They all further received academic education at some of the most prestigious universities in the UK and the US at the time .
Revised:  Dawood always considered education as a top priority, which is evident by the fact that his own children and those from his larger family were all send for best schooling to the UK . They all further received academic education at some of the most prestigious universities in the UK and the US .
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Original:  Ahmed Dawood and his family have also been involved in the construction of Masjid-e-Quba in Karachi ’ s Dawood Colony.
Revised:  Dawood and his family have also been involved in the construction of Masjid-e-Quba in Karachi ’ s Dawood Colony.
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Original:  Ahmed Dawood and his family have also been involved in the construction of Masjid-e-Quba in Karachi ’ s Dawood Colony.
Revised:  Ahmed Dawood and his family have also been involved in the construction of Masjid-e-Quba in Karachi ' s Dawood Colony.
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Original:  In 1981, he was involved in the creation of a united platform for Memons , who showed tendencies of fragmentation .
Revised:  In 1981, he was involved in the creation of a united platform for Memons .
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Original:  Ahmed Dawood died on 2 January 2002 in Karachi at the age of 96.
Revised:  Dawood died 2 January 2002 in Karachi at the age of 96.
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Original:  In 2003,  the Ahmed Dawood Chair was established at the SBA School of Science and Engineering Dean to maintain the high faculty and educational leadership standards at the Lahore University of Management Sciences (LUMS) .
Revised:  In 2003, the Ahmed Dawood Chair at the SBA School of Science and Engineering Dean to maintain the high faculty and educational leadership standards at the Lahore University of Management Sciences (LUMS) .
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Original: Professional life in Pakistan Ahmed Dawood and his three brothers — Suleman Dawood, Siddiq Dawood,  Sattar Dawood — started new business activities as Dawood Cooperation Ltd. with an office in Karachi ’ s old business area New Chali and soon after opened a shop on Saleh Muhammad Street (adjacent to Bandar Road) for trading textile and yarn.
Revised: Professional life in Pakistan Dawood and his three brothers — Suleman Dawood, Siddiq Dawood, Sattar Dawood — started new business activities as Dawood Cooperation Ltd. with an office in Karachi ’ s old business area New Chali and soon after opened a shop on Saleh Muhammad Street (adjacent to Bandar Road) for trading textile and yarn.
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Original: Professional life in Pakistan Ahmed Dawood and his three brothers — Suleman Dawood, Siddiq Dawood,  Sattar Dawood — started new business activities as Dawood Cooperation Ltd. with an office in Karachi ’ s old business area New Chali and soon after opened a shop on Saleh Muhammad Street (adjacent to Bandar Road) for trading textile and yarn.
Revised: Professional life in Pakistan Ahmed Dawood and his three brothers — Suleman Dawood, Siddiq Dawood, and Sattar Dawood — started new business activities as Dawood Cooperation Ltd. with an office in Karachi ’ s old business area New Chali and soon after opened a shop on Saleh Muhammad Street (adjacent to Bandar Road) for trading textile and yarn.
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Original: Professional life in Pakistan Ahmed Dawood and his three brothers — Suleman Dawood, Siddiq Dawood,  Sattar Dawood — started new business activities as Dawood Cooperation Ltd. with an office in Karachi ’ s old business area New Chali and soon after opened a shop on Saleh Muhammad Street (adjacent to Bandar Road) for trading textile and yarn.
Revised: Professional life in Pakistan Ahmed Dawood and his three brothers — Suleman Dawood, Siddiq Dawood, Sattar Dawood — started new business activities as Dawood Cooperation Ltd. with an office in Karachi ' s old business area New Chali and soon after opened a shop on Saleh Muhammad Street (adjacent to Bandar Road) for trading textile and yarn.
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Original:  [[File:Japanese Prime Minister Nobusuke Kishi and Ahmed Dawood.jpg|350px| Ahmed Dawood with Japanese Prime Minister Nobusuke Kishi during his 1957 visit to Pakistan at the Dawood Cotton Mills in Karachi . ]]
Revised:  [[File:Japanese Prime Minister Nobusuke Kishi and Ahmed Dawood.jpg|350px| Ahmed Dawood with Japanese Prime Minister Nobusuke Kishi at the Dawood Cotton Mills in Karachi . ]]
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Original:  In the following decades, particular in the 1950s and 1960s, Ahmed Dawood founded successful diverse businesses and was the chairman of companies dealing in cotton, textiles, paper, consumer goods, oil, logistics, insurance, jute, chemicals, motorbikes, home appliances, electronics, and fertilisers  in East and West Pakistan.
Revised:  In the following decades, particular in the 1950s and 1960s, Dawood founded several businesses and chaired companies in the cotton, textiles, paper, consumer goods, oil, logistics, insurance, jute, chemicals, motorbikes, home appliances, electronics, and fertilisers in East and West Pakistan.
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Original:  In the following decades, particular in the 1950s and 1960s, Ahmed Dawood founded successful diverse businesses and was the chairman of companies dealing in cotton, textiles, paper, consumer goods, oil, logistics, insurance, jute, chemicals, motorbikes, home appliances, electronics, and fertilisers  in East and West Pakistan.
Revised:  In the following decades, particular in the 1950s and 1960s, Ahmed Dawood founded successful diverse businesses and was the chairman of companies dealing in cotton, textiles, paper, consumer goods, oil, logistics, insurance, jute, chemicals, motorbikes, home appliances, electronics, and fertilisers industries in East and West Pakistan.
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Original:  The family-run business also emerged as one of the leading players in the export sector and a number of its associated companies won numerous national and international awards.
Revised:  The family-run business also emerged as a leading players in the export sector and a number of its associated companies won numerous national and international awards.
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Original:  The family-run business also emerged as one of the leading players in the export sector and a number of its associated companies won numerous national and international awards.
Revised:  The family-run business also emerged as one of the leading players in the export sector and many associated companies won numerous national and international awards.
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Original:  The family-run business also emerged as one of the leading players in the export sector and a number of its associated companies won numerous national and international awards.
Revised:  The family-run business also emerged as one of the leading players in the export sector and a number of its associated companies won awards.
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Original:  Pakistan ’ s former president Field Marshall Ayub Khan was not only a contemporary witness but also an admirer of Ahmed Dawood.
Revised:  Pakistan ' s former president Field Marshall Ayub Khan was not only a contemporary witness but also an admirer of Ahmed Dawood.
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Original:  Ahmed Dawood was sitting on the board of directors of many local companies.
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Original:  He was also , at some point, the vice-chairman of Pakistan Industrial Credit and Investment Corporation (PICIC), one of the first development finance institutions in the country.
Revised:  He was also the vice-chairman of Pakistan Industrial Credit and Investment Corporation (PICIC), one of the first development finance institutions in the country.
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Original:  A private loan from the World Bank ’ s International Finance Corporation (IFC) supported the realisation of the fertiliser factory in Sheikhpura.
Revised:  A private loan from the World Bank ' s International Finance Corporation (IFC) supported the realisation of the fertiliser factory in Sheikhpura.
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Original:  The Dawood Jute Mills were set up in East Pakistan  and the construction of the Dawood Hercules Chemical Fertilizer factory started.
Revised:  The Dawood Jute Mills were set up in East Pakistan , and the construction of the Dawood Hercules Chemical Fertilizer factory started.
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Original:  At the peak of his economic ventures in 1970, there were some 35,000 people employed in the different entities Ahmed Dawood chaired .
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Original:  Ahmed Dawood and his family lost a number of valuable factories located in Dhaka and Chittagong — including Karnaphuli Paper Mills Limited, Karnaphuli Rayon and Chemical Limited, Dawood Jute Mills Limited and Dawood Shipping Company Limited — accounting for 60\% of their industrial undertakings.
Revised:  Dawood and his family lost a number of valuable factories located in Dhaka and Chittagong — including Karnaphuli Paper Mills Limited, Karnaphuli Rayon and Chemical Limited, Dawood Jute Mills Limited and Dawood Shipping Company Limited — accounting for 60\% of their industrial undertakings.
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Original:  Ahmed Dawood and his family lost a number of valuable factories located in Dhaka and Chittagong — including Karnaphuli Paper Mills Limited, Karnaphuli Rayon and Chemical Limited, Dawood Jute Mills Limited and Dawood Shipping Company Limited — accounting for 60\% of their industrial undertakings.
Revised:  Ahmed Dawood and his family lost factories in Dhaka and Chittagong — including Karnaphuli Paper Mills Limited, Karnaphuli Rayon and Chemical Limited, Dawood Jute Mills Limited and Dawood Shipping Company Limited — accounting for 60\% of their industrial undertakings.
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Original:  The pressure also increased for the remaining businesses in Pakistan and for Ahmed Dawood.
Revised:  The pressure also increased for the remaining businesses in Pakistan and for Dawood.
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Original:  In the same year, the nationalisation process affected a large number of industries including those of Ahmed Dawood and his family.
Revised:  In the same year, the nationalisation process affected a many industries including those of Ahmed Dawood and his family.
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Original:  In the same year, the nationalisation process affected a large number of industries including those of Ahmed Dawood and his family.
Revised:  In the same year, the nationalisation process affected a large number of industries including those of Dawood and his family.
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Original:  Dawood Petroleum was put under martial law in 1972  and the Oil business became in 1974 an official part of Pakistan State Oil (PSO).
Revised:  Dawood Petroleum was put under martial law in 1972 , and the Oil business became in 1974 an official part of Pakistan State Oil (PSO).
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Original:  Ahmed Dawood “ was downsized to almost insignificance [but] he did not give up, he continued to develop things though at a much lesser scale ” . Of the remaining businesses that Ahmed Dawood headed as Chairman, it was Dawood  Hercules Chemical Ltd. and their fertiliser factory in Sheikhupura near Lahore which was a profitable joint venture.
Revised:  Dawood " was downsized to almost insignificance [but] he did not give up, he continued to develop things though at a much lesser scale ” . Of the remaining businesses that Ahmed Dawood headed as Chairman, it was Dawood Hercules Chemical Ltd. and their fertiliser factory in Sheikhupura near Lahore which was a profitable joint venture.
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Original:  Ahmed Dawood “ was downsized to almost insignificance [but] he did not give up, he continued to develop things though at a much lesser scale ” . Of the remaining businesses that Ahmed Dawood headed as Chairman, it was Dawood  Hercules Chemical Ltd. and their fertiliser factory in Sheikhupura near Lahore which was a profitable joint venture.
Revised:  Ahmed Dawood “ was downsized to almost insignificance [but] he did not give up, he continued to develop things though at a much lesser scale " . Of the remaining businesses that Ahmed Dawood headed as Chairman, it was Dawood Hercules Chemical Ltd. and their fertiliser factory in Sheikhupura near Lahore which was a profitable joint venture.
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Original:  Ahmed Dawood “ was downsized to almost insignificance [but] he did not give up, he continued to develop things though at a much lesser scale ” . Of the remaining businesses that Ahmed Dawood headed as Chairman, it was Dawood  Hercules Chemical Ltd. and their fertiliser factory in Sheikhupura near Lahore which was a profitable joint venture.
Revised:  Ahmed Dawood “ was downsized to almost insignificance [but] he did not give up, he continued to develop things though at a much lesser scale ” . Of the remaining businesses that Dawood Hercules Chemical Ltd. and their fertiliser factory in Sheikhupura near Lahore which was a profitable joint venture.
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