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Original:  Clinton -- who carried the state by a landslide in 1996 -- did not hesitate to ask for more votes, telling the crowd: "I want you to do better than that for Barack Obama."
Revised:  Clinton — who carried the state by a landslide in 1996 -- did not hesitate to ask for more votes, telling the crowd: "I want you to do better than that for Barack Obama."
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Original:  Clinton -- who carried the state by a landslide in 1996 -- did not hesitate to ask for more votes, telling the crowd: "I want you to do better than that for Barack Obama."
Revised:  Clinton -- who carried the state by a landslide in 1996 — did not hesitate to ask for more votes, telling the crowd: "I want you to do better than that for Barack Obama."
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Original:  "But more important  they are friends of the middle class, of working men and women in this state and this country I'm running to represent."
Revised:  "But more important , they are friends of the middle class, of working men and women in this state and this country I'm running to represent."
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Original:  "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Obama has a chance to rewrite the 21st century," Clinton said, according to the Star Tribune, referring to the presidency of George W. Bush.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% Obama has a chance to rewrite the 21st century," Clinton said, according to the Star Tribune, referring to the presidency of George W. Bush.
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Original:  "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Obama has a chance to rewrite the 21st century," Clinton said, according to the Star Tribune, referring to the presidency of George W. Bush.
Revised:  "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% has a chance to rewrite the 21st century," Clinton said, according to the Star Tribune, referring to the presidency of George W. Bush.
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Original:  Before introducing Clinton, Franken thanked him for the support of him and his wife.
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Original: Clinton was the final speaker in a long list of Minnesota Democrats including, former U.S. Vice President Walter Mondale  the mayors of Minneapolis and Saint Paul, R. T. Rybak and Chris Coleman,  Senator Amy Klobuchar,  Rep. Keith Ellison, Speaker of the Minnesota House of Representatives Margaret Anderson Kelliher.
Revised: Clinton was the final speaker in a long list of Minnesota Democrats , including: former U.S. Vice President Walter Mondale the mayors of Minneapolis and Saint Paul, R. T. Rybak and Chris Coleman, Senator Amy Klobuchar, Rep. Keith Ellison, Speaker of the Minnesota House of Representatives Margaret Anderson Kelliher.
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Original: Clinton was the final speaker in a long list of Minnesota Democrats including, former U.S. Vice President Walter Mondale  the mayors of Minneapolis and Saint Paul, R. T. Rybak and Chris Coleman,  Senator Amy Klobuchar,  Rep. Keith Ellison, Speaker of the Minnesota House of Representatives Margaret Anderson Kelliher.
Revised: Clinton was the final speaker in a long list of Minnesota Democrats including, former U.S. Vice President Walter Mondale , the mayors of Minneapolis and Saint Paul, R. T. Rybak and Chris Coleman, Senator Amy Klobuchar, Rep. Keith Ellison, Speaker of the Minnesota House of Representatives Margaret Anderson Kelliher.
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Original: Clinton was the final speaker in a long list of Minnesota Democrats including, former U.S. Vice President Walter Mondale  the mayors of Minneapolis and Saint Paul, R. T. Rybak and Chris Coleman,  Senator Amy Klobuchar,  Rep. Keith Ellison, Speaker of the Minnesota House of Representatives Margaret Anderson Kelliher.
Revised: Clinton was the final speaker in a long list of Minnesota Democrats including, former U.S. Vice President Walter Mondale the mayors of Minneapolis and Saint Paul, R. T. Rybak and Chris Coleman, U.S. Senator Amy Klobuchar, Rep. Keith Ellison, Speaker of the Minnesota House of Representatives Margaret Anderson Kelliher.
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Original: Clinton was the final speaker in a long list of Minnesota Democrats including, former U.S. Vice President Walter Mondale  the mayors of Minneapolis and Saint Paul, R. T. Rybak and Chris Coleman,  Senator Amy Klobuchar,  Rep. Keith Ellison, Speaker of the Minnesota House of Representatives Margaret Anderson Kelliher.
Revised: Clinton was the final speaker in a long list of Minnesota Democrats including, former U.S. Vice President Walter Mondale the mayors of Minneapolis and Saint Paul, R. T. Rybak and Chris Coleman, Senator Amy Klobuchar, U.S. Rep. Keith Ellison, Speaker of the Minnesota House of Representatives Margaret Anderson Kelliher.
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Original: A Commitee against the law has formed and asked for the Referendum.
Revised: A Committee against the law has formed and asked for the Referendum.
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Original:  The law was approved using an urgent mechanism of the parliament, as  there were an urgent need of such a law.
Revised:  The law was approved using an urgent mechanism of the parliament, as if there were an urgent need of such a law.
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Original:  Althought spokespersons for Mr. Glaxer (including his son) have stressed that nothing has been finalised, it appears that he intends to raise ticket prices, income, profits whilst capping spending on player transfers.
Revised:  Althought spokespersons for Mr. Glazer (including his son) have stressed that nothing has been finalised, it appears that he intends to raise ticket prices, income, profits whilst capping spending on player transfers.
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Original:  Mr Glazor - who owns over 76.2\% of the clubs shares through his investment company, Red Football - enraged fans when he started to accumulate shares earlier this year in an attempt to gain control of the what amounts to the worlds most successful football club.
Revised:  Mr . Glazer - who owns over 76.2\% of the clubs shares through his investment company, Red Football - enraged fans when he started to accumulate shares earlier this year in an attempt to gain control of the what amounts to the worlds most successful football club.
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Original:  To gain control of the club, Glazor used borrowed money and it he is set to transfer this money to the clubs books when he gains full control.
Revised:  To gain control of the club, Glazer used borrowed money and it he is set to transfer this money to the clubs books when he gains full control.
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Original:  To counter this Mr. Glazor apparently intends to raise ticket prices by about 50\% and to increase revenues by 52\% to £245.6m (from £161.5m this year) over the next five years.
Revised:  To counter this Mr. Glazer apparently intends to raise ticket prices by about 50\% and to increase revenues by 52\% to £245.6m (from £161.5m this year) over the next five years.
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Original:  Manchestor United has more fans, a higher market value, a more valuable and more widely recognised brand and is more profitable than any other football club in the world.
Revised:  Manchester United has more fans, a higher market value, a more valuable and more widely recognised brand and is more profitable than any other football club in the world.
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Original:  Althought spokespersons for Mr. Glazer (including his son) have stressed that nothing has been finalised, it appears that he intends to raise ticket prices, income, profits whilst capping spending on player transfers.
Revised:  Although spokespersons for Mr. Glazer (including his son) have stressed that nothing has been finalised, it appears that he intends to raise ticket prices, income, profits whilst capping spending on player transfers.
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Original:  To gain control of the club, Glazer used borrowed money and it he is set to transfer this money to the clubs books when he gains full control.
Revised:  To gain control of the club, Glazer used borrowed money and he is set to transfer this money to the clubs books when he gains full control.
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Original:  To gain control of the club, Glazer used borrowed money and it he is set to transfer this money to the clubs books when he gains full control.
Revised:  To gain control of the club, Glazer used borrowed money and it he is set to transfer this money to the club's books when he gains full control.
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Original: The intentions of Manchester United's new owner, US sports tycoon Malcolm Glazer, for the club have been revealed.
Revised: The intentions of Manchester United's new owner, U.S. sports tycoon Malcolm Glazer, for the club have been revealed.
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Original:  Mr. Glazer - who owns over 76.2\% of the club's shares through his investment company, Red Football - enraged fans when he started to accumulate shares earlier this year in an attempt to gain control of the what amounts to the worlds most successful football club.
Revised:  Mr. Glazer - who owns over 76.2\% of the club's shares through his investment company, Red Football - enraged fans when he started to accumulate shares earlier this year in an attempt to gain control of the what amounts to the world's most successful football club.
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Original: The depeering has resulted in some customers of both companies experiencing dropped connections.
Revised: The de-peering has resulted in some customers of both companies experiencing dropped connections.
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Original:  In shutting down the peering, according to Cogent, Sprint is in violation of a contractual obligation to exchange Internet traffic .
Revised:  In shutting down the peering, according to Cogent, Sprint is in violation of a contractual obligation to exchange Internet traffic 
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Original:  The actual reasons for the dispute are unknown, though Cogent has had similar disputes in the past with Level3, Telia, Limelight, France Telecom, and AOL .
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Original:  However, most consumer ISPs and college networks are "multihomed", and thus could connect through seperate lines to both companies  
Revised:  However, most consumer ISPs and college networks are "multihomed", and thus could connect through seperate lines to both companies . 
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Original:  However, most consumer ISPs and college networks are "multihomed", and thus could connect through seperate lines to both companies  
Revised:  However, most consumer ISPs and college networks are "multihomed", and thus could connect through seperate lines to both companies Related new
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Original:  The actual reasons for the dispute are unknown, though Cogent has had similar disputes in the past with Level3, Telia, Limelight, France Telecom, and AOL. Sprint Nextel logo The two ISPs are currently in litigation over peering, the free exchange of traffic between the ISPs for little or no cost.
Revised:  The actual reasons for the dispute are unknown, though Cogent has had similar disputes in the past with Level3, Telia, Limelight, France Telecom, and AOL. Cogent Communmications logo The two ISPs are currently in litigation over peering, the free exchange of traffic between the ISPs for little or no cost.
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Original:  The actual reasons for the dispute are unknown, though Cogent has had similar disputes in the past with Level3, Telia, Limelight, France Telecom, and AOL. Cogent Communmications logo The two ISPs are currently in litigation over peering, the free exchange of traffic between the ISPs for little or no cost.
Revised:  The actual reasons for the dispute are unknown, though Cogent has had similar disputes in the past with Level3, Telia, Limelight, France Telecom, and AOL. Cogent Communications logo The two ISPs are currently in litigation over peering, the free exchange of traffic between the ISPs for little or no cost.
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Original: Studs Terkel, an activist , radio talk show host and Pulitzer Prize winning author, has died at the age of 96.
Revised: Studs Terkel, an activist , radio talk show host and Pulitzer Prize-winning author, has died at the age of 96.
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Original:  He was most known for his oral histories, but also had is own radio-show , an author of several books and an activist.
Revised:  He was most known for his oral histories, but also had is own radio show , an author of several books and an activist.
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Original:  He was most known for his oral histories, but also had is own radio show, an author of several books  and an activist.
Revised:  He was mostly known for his oral histories, but also had is own radio show, an author of several books and an activist.
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Original:  He was most known for his oral histories, but also had is own radio show, an author of several books  and an activist.
Revised:  He was most known for his oral histories, but he was also host of his own radio show, an author of several books and an activist.
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Original:  He was most known for his oral histories, but also had is own radio show, an author of several books  and an activist.
Revised:  He was most known for his oral histories, but also had is own radio show, an author of several books , and an activist.
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Original:  In 1970, he published a book about the Great Depression titled Hard Times: An Oral History of the Great Depression  which told the stories of people from all walks of life who were affected by the stock market crash in 1929.
Revised:  In 1970, he published a book about the Great Depression , entitled Hard Times: An Oral History of the Great Depression which told the stories of people from all walks of life who were affected by the stock market crash in 1929.
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Original:  In 1970, he published a book about the Great Depression titled Hard Times: An Oral History of the Great Depression  which told the stories of people from all walks of life who were affected by the stock market crash in 1929.
Revised:  In 1970, he published a book about the Great Depression titled Hard Times: An Oral History of the Great Depression , which told the stories of people from all walks of life who were affected by the stock market crash in 1929.
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Original:  In 2007, Terkel published his memoirs titles Touch and Go  in which he described himself as a  martini and cigar man  who never retired.
Revised:  In 2007, Terkel published his memoirs , titled Touch and Go in which he described himself as a martini and cigar man who never retired.
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Original:  In 2007, Terkel published his memoirs titles Touch and Go  in which he described himself as a  martini and cigar man  who never retired.
Revised:  In 2007, Terkel published his memoirs titles Touch and Go , in which he described himself as a martini and cigar man who never retired.
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Original:  In 2007, Terkel published his memoirs titles Touch and Go  in which he described himself as a  martini and cigar man  who never retired.
Revised:  In 2007, Terkel published his memoirs titles Touch and Go in which he described himself as a " martini and cigar man who never retired.
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Original:  In 2007, Terkel published his memoirs titles Touch and Go  in which he described himself as a  martini and cigar man  who never retired.
Revised:  In 2007, Terkel published his memoirs titles Touch and Go in which he described himself as a martini and cigar man " who never retired.
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Original:  "My dad led a long, full, eventful, sometimes tempestuous, but very satisfying life.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% His death was peaceful, no agony.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% peaceful, no agony.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 2007, Terkel published his memoirs, titled Touch and Go, in which he described himself as a "martini and cigar man" who never retired.
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Original:  "It was those loners — argumentative ones, deceptively quite ones, the talkers and the walkers — who, always engaged in something outside themselves, unintentionally became my mentors," said Terkel in his memoirs
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Original:  Attacking my faith won't fix this economy and this campaign should not be about barring false witness to fellow Christians," says Hagan in her October 31 ad  
Revised:  Attacking my faith won't fix this economy and this campaign should not be about barring false witness to fellow Christians," says Hagan in her October 31 ad . 
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Original: The end of the ad shows a picture of Hagan while another woman's voice, meant to sound like Hagan's, announces, "There is no God!" .
Revised: The end of the ad shows a picture of Hagan while another woman's voice, meant to sound like Hagan's, announces, "There is no God!" 
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Original: Hagan is Presbyterian and teaches Sunday school and has since answered to Dole's ad , with one of her own.
Revised: Hagan is Presbyterian and teaches Sunday school and has since answered to Dole's ad with one of her own.
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Original:  Concern that the speech may exacerbate the country's current political crisis has led to army chief, General Anupong Paochinda, to order the event closely monitored.
Revised:  Concern that the speech may exacerbate the country's current political crisis has led to army chief, General Anupong Paochinda, ordering that the event be closely monitored.
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Original:  Thailand's military have previously given assurances that there will not be a repeat of the  2006 coup which deposed Thaksin and his populist government.
Revised:  Thailand's military have previously given assurances that there will not be a repeat of the bloodless 2006 coup which deposed Thaksin and his populist government.
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Original:  The court is expected to monitor Thaksin's broadcast message;
Revised:  The court is expected to review Thaksin's broadcast message;
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Original:  Security staff for the PAD protest outside Government house were attacked with a grenade and another explosive device was thrown into the garden of a senior member of the judiciary.
Revised:  Security staff for the PAD protest outside Government House were attacked with a grenade and another explosive device was thrown into the garden of a senior member of the judiciary.
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Original:  According to Thai police the attack on PAD supporters saw ten injured   . Related new
Revised:  According to Thai police the attack on PAD supporters saw ten injured . . Related new
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Original:  Earlier in the week two attacks on anti-government parties took place.
Revised:  Thursday saw two attacks on anti-government parties took place.
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Original:  Earlier in the week two attacks on anti-government parties took place.
Revised:  Earlier in the week two attacks on anti-government parties take place.
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Original:  According to Thai police the attack on PAD supporters saw ten injured .
Revised:  According to Thai police the attack on PAD supporters injured ten .
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Original:  As of Sunday,  other media coverage has been minimal, a far cry from last week's debate between Nader and Baldwin in Washington, DC
Revised:  As of Sunday, any other media coverage has been minimal, a far cry from last week's debate between Nader and Baldwin in Washington, DC
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Original:  Image:Chuck Baldwin photo.png|90px|Chuck Baldwin Baldwin voiced his concerns about the growth of the federal government as well as the troubled global economy.
Revised:  Baldwin voiced his concerns about the growth of the federal government as well as the troubled global economy.
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Original:  Image:Chuck Baldwin photo.png|90px|Chuck Baldwin Baldwin voiced his concerns about the growth of the federal government as well as the troubled global economy.
Revised:  Image:Chuck Baldwin photo.png|90px|Chuck Baldwin Baldwin voiced his concerns about the growth of the federal government as well as the troubled global economy.
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Original:  Image:Bob Barr-2008.jpg|90px|Former Congressman Bob Barr At this time, it is unknown how many tuned in to see the debate when it was broadcast nationally on C-SPAN both Friday and Saturday.
Revised:  At this time, it is unknown how many tuned in to see the debate when it was broadcast nationally on C-SPAN both Friday and Saturday.
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Original:  As of Sunday, any other media coverage has been minimal, a far cry from last week's debate between Nader and Baldwin in Washington, DC  
Revised:  As of Sunday, any other media coverage has been minimal, a far cry from last week's debate between Nader and Baldwin in Washington, DC . 
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Original:  As of Sunday, any other media coverage has been minimal, a far cry from last week's debate between Nader and Baldwin in Washington, DC  
Revised:  As of Sunday, any other media coverage has been minimal, a far cry from last week's debate between Nader and Baldwin in Washington, DC Candidate
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Original: Despite their radically different political beliefs, all of the candidates' opinions on one issue were similar ;
Revised: Despite their radically different political beliefs, all of the candidates' opinions on one issue were similar :
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Original:  Sheikh Saad, is in his 70s.
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Original:  In July 2003 the Emir appointed Sheik Sabah prime minister.
Revised:  In July 2003 the Emir replaced him with Sheik Sabah as prime minister.
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Original:  The Monitor has made this switch as a response to rising print publication costs and falling subscriptions 
Revised:  The Monitor has made this announcement as a response to rising print publication costs and falling subscriptions 
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Original:  The Pulitzer-winning newspaper employs 95 correspondents and 8 foreign bureaus   , making it the most prominent newspaper to transition to online publication.
Revised:  The newspaper employs 95 correspondents and 8 foreign bureaus , making it the most prominent newspaper to transition to online publication.
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Original: File photo of Felipe Massa (2008) Interlagos Ferrari driver Felipe Massa wins the FIA Formula One 2008 Grande Prêmio Santander do Brasil at Autódromo José Carlos Pace, São Paulo, Brazil  Fernando Alonso came second while his Renault teammate Nelson Piquet Jr. slipped in the Senna's S-curve and broke his car's rear due to the wet track.
Revised: File photo of Felipe Massa (2008) Interlagos Ferrari driver Felipe Massa won yesterday's FIA Formula One 2008 Grande Prêmio Santander do Brasil at Autódromo José Carlos Pace, São Paulo, Brazil Fernando Alonso came second while his Renault teammate Nelson Piquet Jr. slipped in the Senna's S-curve and broke his car's rear due to the wet track.
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Original: File photo of Felipe Massa (2008) Interlagos Ferrari driver Felipe Massa wins the FIA Formula One 2008 Grande Prêmio Santander do Brasil at Autódromo José Carlos Pace, São Paulo, Brazil  Fernando Alonso came second while his Renault teammate Nelson Piquet Jr. slipped in the Senna's S-curve and broke his car's rear due to the wet track.
Revised: File photo of Felipe Massa (2008) Interlagos Ferrari driver Felipe Massa wins the FIA Formula One 2008 Grande Prêmio Santander do Brasil at Autódromo José Carlos Pace, São Paulo, Brazil . Fernando Alonso came second while his Renault teammate Nelson Piquet Jr. slipped in the Senna's S-curve and broke his car's rear due to the wet track.
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