wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Hassan accused Ban of "ignorantly following some domineering powers which have a long record of uncalled-for interference in other countries' internal affairs and colonisation ".
Revised:  Hassan accused Ban of "ignorantly following some domineering powers which have a long record of uncalled-for interference in other countries' internal affairs and colonization ".
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Original:  Hassan accused Ki-moon of "ignorantly following some domineering powers which have a long record of uncalled-for interference in other countries' internal affairs and colonization ".
Revised:  Hassan accused Ki-moon of "ignorantly following some domineering powers which have a long record of uncalled-for interference in other countries' internal affairs and colonisation ".
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Original: Iran has also charged the United Nations with interfering in the country, with Iranian foreign minister Hassan Ghashghavi accusing Secretary-General of the United Nations Ban Ki-moon of "meddling in Iran's internal affairs" when Ki-moon called upon Iran to respect the "will of its people".
Revised: Iran has also charged the United Nations with interfering in the country, with Iranian foreign minister Hassan Ghashghavi accusing Secretary-General of the United Nations Ban Ki-moon of "meddling in Iran's internal affairs" when Ban called upon Iran to respect the "will of its people".
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Original:  The U.K. arm of the company is to be liquidated.
Revised:  The U.K. arm is to be liquidated.
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Original:  Because of the U.K.'s and the E.U.'s monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had .
Revised:  Because of the U.K.'s and the E.U.'s monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had 
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Original:  The administrators at Deloitte are Neville Kahn, Lee Manning, and Nick Edwards
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Original: Financial firm Deloitte Touche Tohmatsu today took over control of the U.K. operations of broadcaster Setanta Sports , as the U.K. arm of the company went into administration.
Revised: The UK operations of broadcaster Setanta Sports , as the U.K. arm of the company went into administration.
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Original: Financial firm Deloitte Touche Tohmatsu today took over control of the U.K. operations of broadcaster Setanta Sports , as the U.K. arm of the company went into administration.
Revised: Financial firm Deloitte Touche Tohmatsu today took over control of the U.K. operations of broadcaster Setanta Sports have been placed into administration.
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Original: With effect from today, the company is to cease accepting payments from television customers who had subscribed to its broadcasting services, and 200 employees of the company in the United Kingdom, which employs 420  in Ireland and the U.K., are to be made redundant.
Revised: With effect from today, the company is to cease accepting payments from television customers who had subscribed to its broadcasting services, and 200 employees of the company in the United Kingdom, which employs 420 people in Ireland and the U.K., are to be made redundant.
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Original:  Setanta Ireland is not  . 64 of the people facing redunancy work for ITN, which had contracted with Setanta to produce Setanta Sports News.
Revised:  Setanta Ireland is not under administration . 64 of the people facing redunancy work for ITN, which had contracted with Setanta to produce Setanta Sports News.
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Original:  Setanta Ireland is not  . 64 of the people facing redunancy work for ITN, which had contracted with Setanta to produce Setanta Sports News.
Revised:  Setanta Ireland is not . 64 of the people facing redundancy work for ITN, which had contracted with Setanta to produce Setanta Sports News.
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Original:  The rights to broadcast 46 Premier League football matches for the next football season, and 23 matches for the three following seasons, have already reverted, and were sold to  ESPN for £260 million yesterday.
Revised:  The rights to broadcast 46 Premier League football matches for the next football season, and 23 matches for the three following seasons, have already reverted, and were sold to United States broadcaster ESPN for £260 million yesterday.
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Original:  Because of the U.K. 's and the E.U. 's monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
Revised:  Because of U.K. 's and the E.U. 's monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
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Original:  Because of the U.K. 's and the E.U. 's monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
Revised:  Because of the U.K. and E.U. 's monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
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Original:  Because of the U.K. 's and the E.U. 's monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
Revised:  Because of the U.K. 's and the E.U. monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
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Original: The UK operations of broadcaster Setanta Sports have been placed into administration.
Revised: The UK operations of Setanta Sports have been placed into administration.
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Original:  The company entered administration after plans to raise fresh capital for the company, which had been making a loss, through Leonard Blavatnik failed.
Revised:  The company entered administration after plans to raise fresh capital through the Russian-American businessman Leonard Blavatnik failed.
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Original:  Setanta's U.K. sports channels, Setanta Sports 1 & 2, have ceased transmission in the U.K. , but are continuing transmission in Ireland.
Revised:  Setanta's UK sports channels, Setanta Sports 1 & 2, have ceased transmission in the U.K. , but are continuing transmission in Ireland.
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Original:  Setanta's U.K. sports channels, Setanta Sports 1 & 2, have ceased transmission in the U.K. , but are continuing transmission in Ireland.
Revised:  Setanta's U.K. sports channels, Setanta Sports 1 & 2, have ceased transmission in the UK , but are continuing transmission in Ireland.
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Original:  Other U.K. channels that have ceased transmission include Setanta Golf and Setanta Sports News.
Revised:  Other UK channels that have ceased transmission include Setanta Golf and Setanta Sports News.
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Original:  Other U.K. channels that have ceased transmission include Setanta Golf and Setanta Sports News.
Revised:  Other U.K. channels that have gone off-air include Setanta Golf and Setanta Sports News.
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Original:  Because of U.K. and E.U. monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
Revised:  Because of UK and European Union monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
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Original:  Because of U.K. and E.U. monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is unable to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
Revised:  Because of U.K. and E.U. monopoly and competition laws, broadcaster British Sky Broadcasting is not permitted to bid for the broadcasting rights that Setanta had
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Original: File:Radiation warning symbol.svg|the international radiation hazard symbol.
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Original:  They had taken an old computer case, with a radioactivity symbol and warning notice , that they had printed out , affixed to the side, to create a "nuclear reactor".
Revised:  They had taken an old computer case, with a radioactivity symbol and warning notice that they had printed out , affixed to the side, to create a "nuclear reactor".
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Original:  They had taken an old computer case, with a radioactivity symbol and warning notice , that they had printed out , affixed to the side, to create a "nuclear reactor".
Revised:  They had taken an old computer case, with a radioactivity symbol and warning notice , that they had printed , affixed to the side, to create a "nuclear reactor".
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Original:  we are willing to give a try to help these people that's just a limited set of options sometimes the common denominator is all of us have at least some contact with iran, or someone who is in contact with someone in iran and we try to fix the problems they have that is a good general description and by the iranians, i of course mean the revolutionaries and protesters, subversives, etc but we promote non-violent means as a group. individuals may feel differently. i dont kn   ]  
Revised:  we are willing to give a try to help these people that's just a limited set of options sometimes the common denominator is all of us have at least some contact with iran, or someone who is in contact with someone in iran and we try to fix the problems they have that is a good general description and by the iranians, i of course mean the revolutionaries and protesters, subversives, etc but we promote non-violent means as a group. individuals may feel differently. i dont know ] 
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Original:  we are willing to give a try to help these people that's just a limited set of options sometimes the common denominator is all of us have at least some contact with iran, or someone who is in contact with someone in iran and we try to fix the problems they have that is a good general description and by the iranians, i of course mean the revolutionaries and protesters, subversives, etc but we promote non-violent means as a group. individuals may feel differently. i dont kn   ]  
Revised:  we are willing to give a try to help these people that's just a limited set of options sometimes the common denominator is all of us have at least some contact with iran, or someone who is in contact with someone in iran and we try to fix the problems they have that is a good general description and by the iranians, i of course mean the revolutionaries and protesters, subversives, etc but we promote non-violent means as a group. individuals may feel differently. i dont kn Tom: ] 
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Original: Tom: 00:10 i have to note on this question that these are my personal beliefs i suspect many members of the group may share some or all of them at the very least some i dont know,
Revised: Tom: i have to note on this question that these are my personal beliefs i suspect many members of the group may share some or all of them at the very least some i dont know,
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Original:  [ i dont want to call them security personnel they dont deserve that title but these people are killing unarmed civilians in the street beating them to death, shooting them, terrorizing innocent people with their brutality if we dont get this message out, who wil   ] 
Revised:  [ i dont want to call them security personnel they dont deserve that title but these people are killing unarmed civilians in the street beating them to death, shooting them, terrorizing innocent people with their brutality if we dont get this message out, who will? ] 
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Original:  [ i dont want to call them security personnel they dont deserve that title but these people are killing unarmed civilians in the street beating them to death, shooting them, terrorizing innocent people with their brutality if we dont get this message out, who wil   ] 
Revised:  [ i dont want to call them security personnel they dont deserve that title but these people are killing unarmed civilians in the street beating them to death, shooting them, terrorizing innocent people with their brutality if we dont get this message out, who wil Tom: ] 
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Original:  we work well at getting information out of the country, at the very least we do our best at coordinating activities in iran and we are having a lot of success i think that's why they want to scare us out of the way if not wor     
Revised:  we work well at getting information out of the country, at the very least we do our best at coordinating activities in iran and we are having a lot of success i think that's why they want to scare us out of the way if not worse 
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Original:  we work well at getting information out of the country, at the very least we do our best at coordinating activities in iran and we are having a lot of success i think that's why they want to scare us out of the way if not wor     
Revised:  we work well at getting information out of the country, at the very least we do our best at coordinating activities in iran and we are having a lot of success i think that's why they want to scare us out of the way if not wor Peter::Anything else people should know? 
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Original:  Peter: Thank you for your ti         
Revised:  Peter: Thank you for your time 
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Original:  Peter: Thank you for your ti         
Revised:  Peter: Thank you for your ti Ben 
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Original:  just some guys being asshole  
Revised:  just some guys being assholes. 
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Original:  Peter: Explain some theats  Peter: What is NedaNet  Peter: Thank you for your time  Ben: No probl
Revised:  Peter: Explain some theats . Peter: What is NedaNet Peter: Thank you for your time Ben: No probl
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Original:  Peter: Explain some theats  Peter: What is NedaNet  Peter: Thank you for your time  Ben: No probl
Revised:  Peter: Explain some theats Peter: What is NedaNet ? Peter: Thank you for your time Ben: No probl
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Original:  Peter: Explain some theats  Peter: What is NedaNet  Peter: Thank you for your time  Ben: No probl
Revised:  Peter: Explain some theats Peter: What is NedaNet Peter: Thank you for your time . Ben: No probl
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Original:  Peter: Explain some theats  Peter: What is NedaNet  Peter: Thank you for your time  Ben: No probl
Revised:  Peter: Explain some theats Peter: What is NedaNet Peter: Thank you for your time Ben: No proble
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Original:   “I can get your bank numbers and I retrieve all your money from your accounts.
Revised:  Messiah stated, “I can get your bank numbers and I retrieve all your money from your accounts.
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Original:  If ever somebody gets your hard drive, he can get every information about you from the drive, no matter where it is hidde, ” said Enoch Kwesi Messiah, computer scientist at Regent University, Ghana.
Revised:  If ever somebody gets your hard drive, he can get every information about you from the drive, no matter where it is hidden. ” said Enoch Kwesi Messiah, computer scientist at Regent University, Ghana.
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Original:  If ever somebody gets your hard drive, he can get every information about you from the drive, no matter where it is hidde, ” said Enoch Kwesi Messiah, computer scientist at Regent University, Ghana.
Revised:  If ever somebody gets your hard drive, he can get every information about you from the drive, no matter where it is hidde, ” 
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Original: Millions of dollars of United States defence contracts, confidential military data, homeland security details were left on a donated hard drive which was purchased for US$35 in Ghana , Africa as part of a journalism documentary by the University of British Columbia .
Revised: According to a journalism documentary by the University of British Columbia, millions of dollars of United States defence contracts, confidential military data, homeland security details were left on a donated hard drive which was purchased for US$35 in Ghana , Africa as part of a journalism documentary by the University of British Columbia .
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Original: Millions of dollars of United States defence contracts, confidential military data, homeland security details were left on a donated hard drive which was purchased for US$35 in Ghana , Africa as part of a journalism documentary by the University of British Columbia .
Revised: Millions of dollars of United States defence contracts, confidential military data, homeland security details were left on a donated hard drive which was purchased for US$35 in Ghana .
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Original:  The PBS investigative documentary, " Ghana: Digital Dumping Ground " , tracked what happened to donated or discarded electronics.
Revised:  The PBS investigative documentary, Ghana: Digital Dumping Ground " , tracked what happened to donated or discarded electronics.
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Original:  The PBS investigative documentary, " Ghana: Digital Dumping Ground " , tracked what happened to donated or discarded electronics.
Revised:  The PBS investigative documentary, " Ghana: Digital Dumping Ground , tracked what happened to donated or discarded electronics.
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Original:  "We plugged them and in and started reading files . …
Revised:  "We plugged them and in and started reading files …
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Original: According to a journalism documentary by the University of British Columbia , millions of dollars of United States defence contracts , confidential military data , homeland security details were left on a donated hard drive which was purchased for US$35 in Ghana.
Revised: According to a journalism documentary by the University of British Columbia , millions of dollars of United States defence contracts and confidential military data , homeland security details were left on a donated hard drive which was purchased for US$35 in Ghana.
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Original: According to a journalism documentary by the University of British Columbia , millions of dollars of United States defence contracts , confidential military data , homeland security details were left on a donated hard drive which was purchased for US$35 in Ghana.
Revised: According to a journalism documentary by the University of British Columbia , millions of dollars of United States defence contracts , confidential military data were left on a donated hard drive which was purchased for US$35 in Ghana.
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Original:  "It's essentially this charred toxic wasteland," said Blake Sifton  one of the students , "It's incredibly difficult to breathe because there's usually between five and six and seven fires going at any time .…
Revised:  "It's essentially this charred toxic wasteland," said Blake Sifton , one of the students , "It's incredibly difficult to breathe because there's usually between five and six and seven fires going at any time .…
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Original:  "It's essentially this charred toxic wasteland," said Blake Sifton  one of the students , "It's incredibly difficult to breathe because there's usually between five and six and seven fires going at any time .…
Revised:  "It's essentially this charred toxic wasteland," said Blake Sifton one of the students . "It's incredibly difficult to breathe because there's usually between five and six and seven fires going at any time .…
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Original:  The journalist students randomly purchased seven hard drives in Tema, Africa.
Revised:  The journalism students randomly purchased seven hard drives in Tema, Africa.
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Original:  As part of the international reporting course the students then submitted the hard drives to Enoch Kwesi Messiah,  computer scientist at Regent University to see if any of the previous owners had erased the data on their hard drives before disposal.
Revised:  As part of the international reporting course the students then submitted the hard drives to Enoch Kwesi Messiah, a computer scientist at Regent University to see if any of the previous owners had erased the data on their hard drives before disposal.
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Original:  Starting from eleventh ahead of teammate Ricciardo, he was able to reach sixth by the finish line.
Revised:  Starting from tenth ahead of teammate Ricciardo, he was able to reach sixth by the finish line.
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Original:  Gutiérrez thanked supportative fans via social media after the race in English and Mexican, and returned to the circuit yesterday as teams took to testing.
Revised:  Gutiérrez thanked supportive fans via social media after the race in English and Mexican, and returned to the circuit yesterday as teams took to testing.
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Original:  The peaceful rally at the capital, , was marred by small groups throwing s at police.
Revised:  The peaceful rally at the capital, , was marred by small groups throwing at police.
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Original:  "We will need to have a look again at what happened  as Esteban seemed to be off his line coming into turn one — maybe he missed his braking point, I don't know — and by then I was in the corner with nowhere to go , " he said .
Revised:  "We will need to have a look again at what happened ," he said, " as Esteban seemed to be off his line coming into turn one — maybe he missed his braking point, I don't know — and by then I was in the corner with nowhere to go , " he said .
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Original:  "We will need to have a look again at what happened  as Esteban seemed to be off his line coming into turn one — maybe he missed his braking point, I don't know — and by then I was in the corner with nowhere to go , " he said .
Revised:  "We will need to have a look again at what happened as Esteban seemed to be off his line coming into turn one — maybe he missed his braking point, I don't know — and by then I was in the corner with nowhere to go " he said .
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Original:  "We will need to have a look again at what happened  as Esteban seemed to be off his line coming into turn one — maybe he missed his braking point, I don't know — and by then I was in the corner with nowhere to go , " he said .
Revised:  "We will need to have a look again at what happened as Esteban seemed to be off his line coming into turn one — maybe he missed his braking point, I don't know — and by then I was in the corner with nowhere to go , " .
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Original: Maldonado , who also attracted 's ire after a near miss, seemed to imply the other driver played a roll in the collision.
Revised: Maldonado seemed to imply the other driver played a roll in the collision.
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Original:  Fellow newcomer of Russia , who claimed the title of F1's youngest-ever points scorer at the season opener, was placed just outside the points despite setting one of the fastest laps of the early part of the race.
Revised:  Fellow newcomer of Russia was placed just outside the points despite setting one of the fastest laps of the early part of the race.
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Original: One inmate, known as Dr Kharden  was quoted as saying "They did things that you would not do against animals let alone to humans.
Revised: One inmate, known as Dr Kharden , was quoted as saying "They did things that you would not do against animals let alone to humans.
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Original: The findings were presented to the Pentagon by the BBC, who said "US defence department has a policy of treating detainees humanely.
Revised: The findings were presented to the Pentagon by the BBC, who said "US defense department has a policy of treating detainees humanely.
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Original: A view over Bagram base from the Air Traffic Control Tower The BBC claims that they have uncovered allegations of abuse and neglect at the detention facility at Bagram Air Base, a United States base in Afghanistan.
Revised: HA HA!!! YOU JUST GOT RICK ROLLED!
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