wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The new phone is the third generation iPhone to hit the market .
Revised:  The new hardware, revealed at the company's annual Worldwide Developers Conference drew attention from the media and iPhone owners alike .
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Original: Features exclusive to the new phone include an upgraded camera, which also allows users to record video and sound, as well as "voice control", which will allow users to control most features of the iPhone with their voice.
Revised: Features new to the iPhone include an upgraded camera, which also allows users to record video and sound, as well as "voice control", which will allow users to control most features of the iPhone with their voice.
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Original: The plant was formerly owned by Raleigh, North Carolina based Goodmark foods , but was purchased by ConAgra Foods seven years ago.
Revised: The plant was formerly owned by Raleigh, North Carolina based Goodmark Foods , but was purchased by ConAgra Foods seven years ago.
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Original:  Three patients are being treated at UNC Jaycees Burn Center in Chapel Hill , North Carolina for serious injuries.
Revised:  Three patients are being treated at UNC Jaycees Burn Center in Chapel Hill for serious injuries.
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Original: At 11:27  Eastern Daylight Time on June 9, 2009 an explosion caused catastrophic damage to a ConAgra Foods plant on Jones Sausage Road in Garner, North Carolina.
Revised: At 11:27 AM Eastern Daylight Time on June 9, 2009 an explosion caused catastrophic damage to a ConAgra Foods plant on Jones Sausage Road in Garner, North Carolina.
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Original: At 11:27 AM Eastern Daylight Time on June 9, 2009 an explosion caused catastrophic damage to a ConAgra Foods plant on Jones Sausage Road in Garner, North Carolina  .
Revised: At 11:27 AM Eastern Daylight Time on June 9, 2009 an explosion caused catastrophic damage to a ConAgra Foods plant on Jones Sausage Road in Garner, North Carolina in the United Stated .
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Original:  Estimates indicate that up to 46 people were sent to area hospitals, and, as of 4:00 PM Eastern Daylight Time, 3 people are still unaccounted for.
Revised:  Estimates indicate that up to 46 people were sent to area hospitals, and, as of 4:00 PM Eastern Daylight Time, three people are still unaccounted for.
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Original:  The plant makes Slim Jim Brand meat snacks, and at 50,000 square feet is one of ConAgra's largest plants.
Revised:  The plant makes Slim Jim brand meat snacks, and at 50,000 square feet is one of ConAgra's largest plants.
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Original:  The explosion caused several road closures in the area, including Interstate 40 Westbound , and Jones Sausage Road
Revised:  The explosion caused several road closures in the area, including Interstate 40 Westbound and Jones Sausage Road
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Original: At 11:27 AM Eastern Daylight Time on June 9, 2009 an explosion caused catastrophic damage to a ConAgra Foods plant on Jones Sausage Road in Garner, North Carolina in the United Stated .
Revised: At 11:27 AM Eastern Daylight Time on June 9, 2009 an explosion caused catastrophic damage to a ConAgra Foods plant on Jones Sausage Road in Garner, North Carolina in the United States .
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Original:  Football Association chief executive Ian Watmore announced that the game would continue as planned at 20:15 GMT and encouraged spectators to arrive at the stadium early.
Revised:  Football Association chief executive Ian Watmore announced that the game would continue as planned at 20:15 BST and encouraged spectators to arrive at the stadium early.
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Original:  Football Association  chief executive Ian Watmore announced that the game would continue as planned at 20:15 BST (19:15 GMT) and encouraged spectators to arrive at the stadium early.
Revised:  Football Association (FA) chief executive Ian Watmore announced that the game would continue as planned at 20:15 BST (19:15 GMT) and encouraged spectators to arrive at the stadium early.
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Original:  Fears of lack of transportation raised the possibility that the game would be forced to play behind closed doors without the team's supporters   .
Revised:  Fears of lack of transportation raised the possibility that the game would be forced to play behind closed doors without the team's supporters . .
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Original:  McDonnell  defeated Deeds by a fraction of a percent in the 2005 Virginia Attorney General election  .
Revised:  McDonnell , who defeated Deeds by a fraction of a percent in the 2005 Virginia Attorney General election .
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Original:  McDonnell, who defeated Deeds by a fraction of a percent in the 2005 Virginia Attorney General election , currently holds a strong advantage over Deeds in the November general election, according to a recent poll conducted by the political blog DailyKos.
Revised:  McDonnell, who defeated Deeds by a fraction of a percent in the 2005 Virginia Attorney General race , currently holds a strong advantage over Deeds in the November general election, according to a recent poll conducted by the political blog DailyKos.
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Original:  McDonnell, who defeated Deeds by a fraction of a percent in the 2005 Virginia Attorney General race, currently holds a strong advantage over Deeds in the November general election, according to a recent poll conducted by the political blog DailyKos.
Revised:  McDonnell, who defeated Deeds by a fraction of a percent in the 2005 Virginia Attorney General race, currently holds a strong advantage over Deeds in the fall general election, according to a recent poll conducted by the political blog DailyKos.
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Original:  McDonnell, who defeated Deeds by a fraction of a percent in the 2005 Virginia Attorney General race, currently holds a strong advantage over Deeds in the fall general election, according to a recent poll conducted by the political blog DailyKos.
Revised:  McDonnell, who defeated Deeds by a fraction of a percent in the 2005 Virginia Attorney General race, currently holds a strong advantage over him in the fall general election, according to a recent poll conducted by the political blog DailyKos.
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Original: The bombing came during the hotel's high season, despite the property being heavily guarded and secure.
Revised: The bombing occured despite the property being heavily guarded and secure.
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Original:  Among the dead were two foreign United Nations officials working for the World Food Program .
Revised:  Among the dead were two foreign United Nations officials working for the World Food Programme .
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Original:  According to the BBC, Fidayeen-e-Islam, a relatively obscure Pakistani militant group, claimed responsibility  the blast.
Revised:  According to the BBC, Fidayeen-e-Islam, a relatively obscure Pakistani militant group, claimed responsibility for the blast.
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Original:  Police were called by a resident to 1302 Sandford Street, London on Saturday.
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Original:  "He came outside and told everybody he discovered this bucket .
Revised:  "He came outside and told everybody he discovered this bucket " said a neighbor of the resident who discovered the remains. "
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Original:  He said his girlfriend had this bucket for two years with gardening stuff in it, and he opened it on Saturday, and it was [filled with] bloody clothes and a blanket, and he called the police , " said a neighbour.
Revised:  He said his girlfriend had this bucket for two years with gardening stuff in it, and he opened it on Saturday, and it was [filled with] bloody clothes and a blanket, and he called the police . " said a neighbour.
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Original:  He said his girlfriend had this bucket for two years with gardening stuff in it, and he opened it on Saturday, and it was [filled with] bloody clothes and a blanket, and he called the police , " said a neighbour.
Revised:  He said his girlfriend had this bucket for two years with gardening stuff in it, and he opened it on Saturday, and it was [filled with] bloody clothes and a blanket, and he called the police , " 
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Original:  When police arrived, they found the remains of a small child in the bucket.
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Original:  A former female resident who had into the basement rental suite about six months ago has been charged with concealing a child's body and offering an indignity to a dead human body.
Revised:  A former female resident of the building has been charged with concealing a child's body and offering an indignity to a dead human body.
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Original:  Neighbours have  come forward saying that a young child about one year old has not been seen for awhile .
Revised:  Neighbours have also come forward saying that a young child about one year old has not been seen for awhile .
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Original:  There is no report of charges against her ex-boyfriend who called the police .
Revised:  There is no report of charges against the man who called the police .
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Original:  His ex-girlfriend who has been charged had moved out two weeks ago .
Revised:  His ex-girlfriend who has been charged had moved out of the building two weeks prior to the discovery of the bodies .
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Original:  The London police are following up with police units in the previous locations where the young lady had resided before.
Revised:  The London police are following up with local police at various locations where the young lady had resided before.
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Original:  There is no report of charges against the man who called the police to report the bodies, who is believed to be the ex-boyfriend of the woman charged with the crime.
Revised:  There is no report of charges against the man who called the police to report the bodies, who is believed to be the ex-boyfriend of Sinn, who is charged with the crime.
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Original: The election in Afghanistan follows the shooting this week of two journalists by Afghan police: Anja Niedringhaus and Kathy Gannon.
Revised: The election in Afghanistan follows the shooting this week of two journalists by Afghan police: and Kathy Gannon.
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Original:  Security in the country may also be affected by the recent departure of British troops from Helmand .
Revised:  Security in the country may also be affected by the recent departure of troops from .
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Original: The polls have reportedly only been marred by a small amount of violence while participation has been described as high by reporters.
Revised: Polls have reportedly only been marred by a small amount of violence while participation has been described as high by reporters.
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Original:  More than 350,000 troops were deployed to protect voters from attacks on polling stations;
Revised:  The government deployed more than 350,000 troops were deployed to protect voters from attacks on polling stations;
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Original:  More than 350,000 troops were deployed to protect voters from attacks on polling stations;
Revised:  More than 350,000 troops to protect voters from attacks on polling stations;
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Original:  On Tuesday, British troops formally shut down their base in Helmand as part of a planned withdrawal process from the region
Revised:  On Tuesday, British troops formally shut down their base in as part of a planned withdrawal process from the region
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Original:  Even before the draft was held, Strasburg was the consensus choice among prognosticators as the likely number one pick.
Revised:  Even before the draft was held, Strasburg was the consensus choice among prognosticators as the likely number-one pick.
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Original:  a record for a newly drafted player   
Revised:  a record for a newly drafted player . 
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Original:  Each year, the Major League Baseball First-Year Player Draft is held, allowing Major League Baseball teams to select from among the best amateur baseball players in North America.
Revised:  Each year, the First-Year Player Draft is held, allowing Major League Baseball teams to select from among the best amateur baseball players in North America.
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Original:  Each year, the Major League Baseball First-Year Player Draft is held, allowing Major League Baseball teams to select from among the best amateur baseball players in North America.
Revised:  Each year, the Major League Baseball First-Year Player Draft is held, allowing MLB teams to select from among the best amateur baseball players in North America.
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Original:  The Nationals have held out the chance of promoting him to the Major League roster by September, possibly making him only the third pitcher to be drafted first overall and play in the Majors during the same year.
Revised:  The Nationals have held out the chance of promoting him to their MLB roster by September, possibly making him only the third pitcher to be drafted first overall and play in the Majors during the same year.
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Original:  Strasburg is expected to command a contract valued at $50 million;
Revised:  Strasburg is expected to demand a contract valued at $50 million;
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Original:  Strasburg is expected to demand a contract valued at  $50 million;
Revised:  Strasburg is expected to demand a contract valued at US $50 million;
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Original:  John Manuel of Baseball America, writing for SI.com, has graded the Nationals,  Colorado Rockies, and  Minnesota Twins as the best performers on the first day of the draft.
Revised:  John Manuel of Baseball America, writing for SI.com, has graded the Nationals, the Colorado Rockies, and Minnesota Twins as the best performers on the first day of the draft.
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Original:  John Manuel of Baseball America, writing for SI.com, has graded the Nationals,  Colorado Rockies, and  Minnesota Twins as the best performers on the first day of the draft.
Revised:  John Manuel of Baseball America, writing for SI.com, has graded the Nationals, Colorado Rockies, and the Minnesota Twins as the best performers on the first day of the draft.
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Original:  The home stadium of the Washington Nationals  Strasburg is expected to sign with the Nationals and play in their farm system this year.
Revised:  The home stadium of the Washington Nationals . Strasburg is expected to sign with the Nationals and play in their farm system this year.
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Original: The incident occurred slightly after 1:00 p.m. (EDT) local time (17:00 UTC).
Revised: The incident occurred slightly after 1:00 p.m. (EDT) (17:00 UTC).
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Original:  People were screaming and ducking down getting on the floor, getting under benches.  
Revised:  People were screaming and ducking down getting on the floor, getting under benches. " 
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Original:  The gunman is currently in critical condition at a local hospital.
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Original:  " Charges are expected to be filed assuming the gunman lives through his injuries
Revised:  Charges are expected to be filed assuming the gunman lives through his injuries
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Original:  " Charges are expected to be filed assuming the gunman lives through his injuries
Revised:  " 
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Original:  The search was hampered by stormy weather,  night, and the instability of the partially collapsed building.
Revised:  The search was hampered by stormy weather, darkness of night, and the instability of the partially collapsed building.
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Original:  Coca-Cola responded by argreeing with the ban but claimed that Coke Zero contained no harmful products.
Revised:  Coca-Cola agreed to abide by the ban but claimed that Coke Zero contained no harmful products.
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Original:  Coca-Cola agreed to abide by the ban but claimed that Coke Zero contained no harmful products .
Revised:  Coca-Cola agreed to abide by the ban but claimed that Coke Zero contained no harmful ingredients .
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Original:  Coke Zero, which was first sold in 2005 in America was launched in Venezuela in April and Coca-Cola Femsa, the Mexican company who bottles the drink  hoped to increase the market share for low calorie drinks by up to 200 percent.
Revised:  Coke Zero, which was first sold in 2005 in the United States, was launched in Venezuela in April and Coca-Cola Femsa, the Mexican company who bottles the drink hoped to increase the market share for low calorie drinks by up to 200 percent.
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Original:  Coke Zero, which was first sold in 2005 in America was launched in Venezuela in April and Coca-Cola Femsa, the Mexican company who bottles the drink  hoped to increase the market share for low calorie drinks by up to 200 percent.
Revised:  Coke Zero, which was first sold in 2005 in America was launched in Venezuela in April and Coca-Cola Femsa, the Mexican company who bottles the drink , hoped to increase the market share for low calorie drinks by up to 200 percent.
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Original: c/e, rmv Coca-Cola Zero Coke Zero, a product of the Coca-Cola Company has been banned in Venezuela by the government.
Revised:  Coca-Cola Zero Coke Zero, a product of the Coca-Cola Company has been banned in Venezuela by the government.
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Original:  Coke Zero, which was first sold in 2005 in the United States, was launched in Venezuela in April and Coca-Cola Femsa, the Mexican company who bottles the drink, hoped to increase the market share for low calorie drinks by up to 200 percent.
Revised: "Coca Cola Zero is made under the highest quality standards around the world and meets the sanitary requirements demanded by the laws of the Bolivarian Republic of Venezuela," said Coca Cola in a statement. Coke Zero, which was first sold in 2005 in the United States, was launched in Venezuela in April and Coca-Cola Femsa, the Mexican company who bottles the drink, hoped to increase the market share for low calorie drinks by up to 200 percent.
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Original:  If genuine, Italian law will permit the government to seize 40\% of the value, some $ 54 billion (€38 billion) of these unclaimed bonds.
Revised:  If genuine, Italian law will permit the government to seize 40\% of the value, some $ 54 billion (€38 billion) for failure to declare these bonds.
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Original:  The Japanese government has said that they are aware of the situation and that they are working with the Italian government to confirm the identity and nationality of the individuals  
Revised:  The Japanese government has said that they are aware of the situation and that they are working with the Italian government to confirm the identity and nationality of the individuals . 
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Original: Italian police of the Guardia Italiana di Finanza have seized US$134 billion (€96 billion) of United States bearer bonds at the border with Switzerland at Chiasso.
Revised: Italian police of the Guardia di Finanza have seized US$134 billion (€96 billion) of United States bearer bonds at the border with Switzerland at Chiasso.
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Original:  Wikinews has been unable to confirm that "Kennedy Bonds" were ever issued  
Revised:  Wikinews has been unable to confirm that "Kennedy Bonds" were ever issued . 
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Original:  Wikinews has been unable to confirm that "Kennedy Bonds" were ever issued .
Revised:  Wikinews has been unable to confirm that "Kennedy Bonds" were ever issued 
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Original:  Based on past experience, this pandemic will be with us for some months, if not years, to come , " the WHO's director Margaret Chan said in a letter written to the organisation's staff.
Revised:  Based on past experience, this pandemic will be with us for some months, if not years, to come . " the WHO's director Margaret Chan said in a letter written to the organisation's staff.
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Original:  Based on past experience, this pandemic will be with us for some months, if not years, to come , " the WHO's director Margaret Chan said in a letter written to the organisation's staff.
Revised:  Based on past experience, this pandemic will be with us for some months, if not years, to come , " 
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Original:  "Moving to pandemic phase six does not imply we will see increased in deaths or serious cases," she said.
Revised:  "Moving to pandemic phase six does not imply we will see increases in deaths or serious cases," she said.
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Original:  Of those infected, the WHO says the majority of them are aged from 30 to 50 years old.
Revised:  Of those infected, the WHO says the majority are aged from 30 to 50 years old.
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Original: , — The Crash Test Honies defeated Devotchkas 275 to 98 in their round two Queensland Leagues Open Season contest at the Morayfield Leisure Centre.
Revised: , — Sunshine Coast, Ausralia based Crash Test Honies defeated Devotchkas 275 to 98 in their round two Queensland Leagues Open Season contest at the Morayfield Leisure Centre.
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Original: , — Sunshine Coast, Ausralia based Crash Test Honies defeated Devotchkas 275 to 98 in their round two Queensland Leagues Open Season contest at the Morayfield Leisure Centre.
Revised: , — , Australia based Crash Test Honies defeated Devotchkas 275 to 98 in their round two Queensland Leagues Open Season contest at the Morayfield Leisure Centre.
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Original: , — , Australia based  Crash Test Honies defeated Devotchkas 275 to 98 in their round two Queensland  Leagues Open Season contest at the Morayfield Leisure Centre.
Revised: , — , Australia based team Crash Test Honies defeated Devotchkas 275 to 98 in their round two Queensland Leagues Open Season contest at the Morayfield Leisure Centre.
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Original:  So far Mousavi has only 31\% of votes .
Revised:  So far Mousavi has only 31\% of votes 
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Original:  An estimated 46 million people are able to vote in Iran and reports say that roughly 76\% of them turned up at the polls
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Original:  So far Mousavi has only 31\% of votes  
Revised:  So far Mousavi has only 31\% of votes . 
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Original:  In addition, there are unconfirmed reports that Mousavi's Tehran campaign headquarters was surrounded by the intelligence service as well  
Revised:  In addition, there are unconfirmed reports that Mousavi's Tehran campaign headquarters was surrounded by the intelligence service as well . 
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Original: Supporters of Mr Mousavi have taken to the streets of Tehran to protest against the results.
Revised: Mousavi's supporters have taken to the streets of Tehran to protest against the results.
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Original:  The College World Series is the final round of a 2009 NCAA Division I Baseball Tournament which determines the top baseball team in the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) Division I, which is the top level of play in American college athletics.
Revised:  The College World Series is the final leg of a 2009 NCAA Division I Baseball Tournament which determines the top baseball team in the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) Division I, which is the top level of play in American college athletics.
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Original:  Play will continue in the form of a double elimination tournament, culminating in a three game championship series to be held on June 22-24  
Revised:  Play will continue in the form of a double-elimination tournament, culminating in a three game championship series to be held on June 22-24 
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Original:  Play will continue in the form of a double elimination tournament, culminating in a three game championship series to be held on June 22-24  
Revised:  Play will continue in the form of a double elimination tournament, culminating in a three game championship series to be held on June 22-24 . 
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