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Original:  he can drop his front, forgo speaking in his lines, and step out of character  " (488).
Revised:  he can drop his front, forgo speaking in his lines, and step out of character . " (488).
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Original:  he can drop his front, forgo speaking in his lines, and step out of character  " (488).
Revised:  he can drop his front, forgo speaking in his lines, and step out of character " 
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Original:  All their actions are not to please anyone but their self in the backstage . Back stage is where performers are present but audience is not, and the performers can step out of character without fear of disrupting the performance.
Revised:  In the backstage, actions are not to please anyone but their self in the backstage . Back stage is where performers are present but audience is not, and the performers can step out of character without fear of disrupting the performance.
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Original:  All their actions are not to please anyone but their self in the backstage . Back stage is where performers are present but audience is not, and the performers can step out of character without fear of disrupting the performance.
Revised:  All their actions are not to please anyone but the self . Back stage is where performers are present but audience is not, and the performers can step out of character without fear of disrupting the performance.
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Original:  All their actions are not to please anyone but their self in the backstage . Back stage is where performers are present but audience is not, and the performers can step out of character without fear of disrupting the performance.
Revised:  All their actions are not to please anyone but their self in the backstage . Back stage is where performers are present but audience is not, hence the performers can step out of character without fear of disrupting the performance.
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Original:  It is where  facts suppressed in the front stage or various kinds of informal actions may appear.
Revised:  It is where various kinds of informal actions, or facts suppressed in the front stage or various kinds of informal actions may appear.
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Original:  It is where  facts suppressed in the front stage or various kinds of informal actions may appear.
Revised:  It is where facts suppressed in the front stage , may appear.
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Original:  Simply put, the back stage is completely separate from the front stage  .
Revised:  Simply put, the back stage is completely separate from the front stage , and it is where the performance of a routine is prepared .
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Original:  No members of the audience can appear in the back ，and the back is a region where the performance of a routine is prepared.
Revised:  No members of the audience may appear in the back ，and the back is a region where the performance of a routine is prepared.
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Original:  Back region is a relative term,  it exists only in regards to a specific audience: where two or more people are present, there will almost never be a true 'back region'.
Revised:  Back region is a relative term, in that it exists only in regards to a specific audience: where two or more people are present, there will almost never be a true 'back region'.
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Original:  Borders/regions Borders or boundaries are important as they prevent or restrict movement of individuals between various regions.
Revised:  Borders/regions Borders , or boundaries, are important as they prevent or restrict movement of individuals between various regions.
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Original:  The border phenomenon is highlighted by Victor Turner's liminality-concept , and thus prolonged in the imaginable field: semiotics of ritual.
Revised:  The border phenomenon is highlighted by Victor Turner's concept of liminality , and thus prolonged in the imaginable field: semiotics of ritual.
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Original:  to be a part or not may be seen as the fundamental asset in a society ;
Revised:  to be a part or not may be seen as the fundamental asset in a society ,
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Original:  but as far society is perceived as a rhizomatic conglomerate ;
Revised:  but as far society is perceived as a rhizomatic conglomerate ,
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Original:  rather such than a unitary , or arborescent whole ;
Revised:  rather such than a unitary or arborescent whole ;
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Original:  The enactment of exclusion from a society seem to be essential for the formation of an imaginary central governing (cf. dMichel Foucault).
Revised:  The enactment of exclusion from a society seem to be essential for the formation of an imaginary central governing (cf. Michel Foucault).
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Original:  Secrets There are different types of secrets which have to be concealed for various reasons: Dark secrets .
Revised:  Secrets There are different types of secrets that have to be concealed for various reasons: Dark secrets .
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Original:  Roles There are three basic roles in Goffman's scheme, each centered on who has access to what information . Performers are most knowledgeable .
Revised:  Roles There are three basic roles in Goffman's scheme, each centered on who has access to what information : performers are most knowledgeable .
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Original:  The roles can be divided into three groups and include : Roles dealing with manipulation information and team borders: The "informer": a pretender to the role of a team member who gains teams trust, is allowed backstage, but then joins the audience and discloses information on the performance.
Revised:  These roles can be divided into three groups and include : Roles dealing with manipulation information and team borders: The "informer": a pretender to the role of a team member who gains teams trust, is allowed backstage, but then joins the audience and discloses information on the performance.
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Original:  The roles can be divided into three groups and include : Roles dealing with manipulation information and team borders: The "informer": a pretender to the role of a team member who gains teams trust, is allowed backstage, but then joins the audience and discloses information on the performance.
Revised:  The roles can be divided into three groups : Roles dealing with manipulation information and team borders: The "informer": a pretender to the role of a team member who gains teams trust, is allowed backstage, but then joins the audience and discloses information on the performance.
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Original:  Communication out of character Performers may communicate out of character on purpose,  to signal to others on their team, or by accident.
Revised:  Communication out of character Performers may communicate out of character on purpose, in order to signal to others on their team, or by accident.
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Original:  Common backstage communications out of character include: Treatment of the absent: derogatory discussion of the absent audience or performers affecting team cohesion.
Revised:  Common backstage out-of-character communications include: Treatment of the absent: derogatory discussion of the absent audience or performers affecting team cohesion.
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Original:  Defensive techniques are employed before an interaction starts and involve : Dramaturgical loyalty: work to keep the team members loyal to the team members and to the performance itself.
Revised:  Defensive techniques are employed before an interaction begins, and involves : Dramaturgical loyalty: work to keep the team members loyal to the team members and to the performance itself.
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Original: (2001) Contemporary Sociological Theory New York, New York.
Revised: (2001) Contemporary Sociological Theory . New York:
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Original:   In addition to this, it also has been said that dramaturgy does not contribute to sociology's goal of understanding the legitimacy of society.
Revised:  2001. In addition to this, it also has been said that dramaturgy does not contribute to sociology's goal of understanding the legitimacy of society.
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Original:  It is claimed to be drafting on positivism, which does not offer an interest in both reason and rationality ;
Revised:  It is claimed to be drafting on positivism, which does not offer an interest in both reason and rationality .
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Original: Welsh, J. (1990) Dramaturgical Analysis and Societal Critique Piscataway, New Jersey.
Revised: Welsh, J. (1990) Dramaturgical Analysis and Societal Critique . Piscataway, NJ:
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Original:  Hunt argued that "social movements can be described as dramas in which protagonists and antagonists compete to affect audiences' interpretations of power relations in a variety of domains ".
Revised:  Hunt argued that "social movements can be described as dramas in which protagonists and antagonists compete to affect audiences' interpretations of power relations in a variety of domains ."
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Original:  Their main avenue of concern for him or her is "customer service ".
Revised:  Their main avenue of concern for him or her is "customer service ."
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Original:  Dramaturgy has also been applied to the emerging interdisciplinary domain of scholarly research known as technoself studies ;
Revised:  Dramaturgy has also been applied to the emerging interdisciplinary domain of scholarly research known as technoself studies ,
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Original:  In terms of blogging , (specifically in fashion blogging)  bloggers and their readers share a social setting in the form of an online platform.
Revised:  In terms of blogging (specifically in fashion blogging) bloggers and their readers share a social setting in the form of an online platform.
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Original:  In terms of blogging , (specifically in fashion blogging)  bloggers and their readers share a social setting in the form of an online platform.
Revised:  In terms of blogging , (specifically in fashion blogging) , bloggers and their readers share a social setting in the form of an online platform.
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Original:  External links Robert Cohen, Role Distance: On Stage and On the Merry-Go-Round , Journal of Dramatic Theory and Criticism , Fall 2004 ErvingGoffman -  The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life: The Main Argument, and the Starting Assumption  The Glamour of Motives: Applications of Kenneth Burke within the Sociological Field.
Revised:  External links Robert Cohen, Role Distance: On Stage and On the Merry-Go-Round ." Journal of Dramatic Theory and Criticism , Fall 2004 ErvingGoffman - The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life: The Main Argument, and the Starting Assumption The Glamour of Motives: Applications of Kenneth Burke within the Sociological Field.
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Original:  External links Robert Cohen, Role Distance: On Stage and On the Merry-Go-Round , Journal of Dramatic Theory and Criticism , Fall 2004 ErvingGoffman -  The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life: The Main Argument, and the Starting Assumption  The Glamour of Motives: Applications of Kenneth Burke within the Sociological Field.
Revised:  External links Robert Cohen, Role Distance: On Stage and On the Merry-Go-Round , Journal of Dramatic Theory and Criticism , Fall 2004 ErvingGoffman - The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life: The Main Argument, and the Starting Assumption ." The Glamour of Motives: Applications of Kenneth Burke within the Sociological Field.
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Original:  In addition to Goffman, this concept has been used by Jürgen Habermas and Harold Garfinkel, among others. alt=The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life book cover|324x324px|The Presentation of Self in Everyday Life, in which Erving Goffman coins dramaturgy as a sociological concept
Revised:  In addition to Goffman, this concept has been used by Jürgen Habermas and Harold Garfinkel, among others. 
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Original: References URL A weblog dedicated to the works and life of Prof.
Revised:  URL A weblog dedicated to the works and life of Prof.
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Original: G Balakrishnan Nair URL Many of his books and audio disclosures are compiled here URL Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal – Sampoorna Vyakyanam – Published by The State Institute of Languages, Kerala.
Revised: G Balakrishnan Nair Many of his books and audio disclosures are compiled here URL Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal – Sampoorna Vyakyanam – Published by The State Institute of Languages, Kerala.
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Original: G Balakrishnan Nair URL Many of his books and audio disclosures are compiled here URL Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal – Sampoorna Vyakyanam – Published by The State Institute of Languages, Kerala.
Revised: G Balakrishnan Nair URL Many of his books and audio disclosures are compiled here Info Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal – Sampoorna Vyakyanam – Published by The State Institute of Languages, Kerala.
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Original: G. Balakrishnan Nair ( 1929-2011 ) was an Sanskrit academician from India, an author and scholar of Narayana Guru's philosophical works.
Revised: G. Balakrishnan Nair ( 1929–2011 ) was an Sanskrit academician from India, an author and scholar of Narayana Guru's philosophical works.
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Original:  Birth and early life Balakrishnan Nair was born on 5 February 1923 at PeroorkadaThiruvananthapuram.
Revised:  Balakrishnan Nair was born on 5 February 1923 at PeroorkadaThiruvananthapuram.
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Original:  Birth and early life Balakrishnan Nair was born on 5 February 1923 at PeroorkadaThiruvananthapuram.
Revised:  Birth and early life Life Nair was born on 5 February 1923 at PeroorkadaThiruvananthapuram.
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Original:  Education%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He was an alumnus of Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and University College Trivandrum.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He was an alumnus of Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and University College Trivandrum.
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Original:  Professional life%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Balakrishnan Nair was on the faculty of Victoria College Palakkad, Mahatma Gandhi College Trivandrum, Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and Women’s CollegeTrivandrum . Book titled Jeevan Mukti Vivekam secured the award of the Kerala Sahitya Akademy- 1979 Award from Sivagiri Mutt in connection with Siva Prathishta Varshikam Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal –
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Balakrishnan Nair was on the faculty of Victoria College Palakkad, Mahatma Gandhi College Trivandrum, Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and Women’s CollegeTrivandrum . Book titled Jeevan Mukti Vivekam secured the award of the Kerala Sahitya Akademy- 1979 Award from Sivagiri Mutt in connection with Siva Prathishta Varshikam Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal –
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Original:  Professional life%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Balakrishnan Nair was on the faculty of Victoria College Palakkad, Mahatma Gandhi College Trivandrum, Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and Women’s CollegeTrivandrum . Book titled Jeevan Mukti Vivekam secured the award of the Kerala Sahitya Akademy- 1979 Award from Sivagiri Mutt in connection with Siva Prathishta Varshikam Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal –
Revised:  Professional life%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Balakrishnan Nair was on the faculty of Victoria College Palakkad, Mahatma Gandhi College Trivandrum, Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and Women’s CollegeTrivandrum . For Jeevan Mukti Vivekam secured the award of the Kerala Sahitya Akademy- 1979 Award from Sivagiri Mutt in connection with Siva Prathishta Varshikam Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal –
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Original:  Professional life%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Balakrishnan Nair was on the faculty of Victoria College Palakkad, Mahatma Gandhi College Trivandrum, Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and Women’s CollegeTrivandrum . Book titled Jeevan Mukti Vivekam secured the award of the Kerala Sahitya Akademy- 1979 Award from Sivagiri Mutt in connection with Siva Prathishta Varshikam Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal –
Revised:  Professional life%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Balakrishnan Nair was on the faculty of Victoria College Palakkad, Mahatma Gandhi College Trivandrum, Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and Women’s CollegeTrivandrum . Book titled Jeevan Mukti Vivekam from the Kerala Sahitya Akademy in 1979 Award from Sivagiri Mutt in connection with Siva Prathishta Varshikam Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal –
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Original:  Professional life%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Balakrishnan Nair was on the faculty of Victoria College Palakkad, Mahatma Gandhi College Trivandrum, Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and Women’s CollegeTrivandrum . Book titled Jeevan Mukti Vivekam secured the award of the Kerala Sahitya Akademy- 1979 Award from Sivagiri Mutt in connection with Siva Prathishta Varshikam Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal –
Revised:  Professional life%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Balakrishnan Nair was on the faculty of Victoria College Palakkad, Mahatma Gandhi College Trivandrum, Government Sanskrit College Trivandrum and Women’s CollegeTrivandrum . Book titled Jeevan Mukti Vivekam secured the award of the Kerala Sahitya Akademy- 1979 From Sivagiri Mutt Sree Narayana Gurudeva Krithikal –
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Original:  Sampoorna Vyakyanam – (Works of Sree Narayana Guru with Complete Interpretations – ten parts compiled in two volumes) published by The State Institute of Languages, Kerala.
Revised:  Sampoorna Vyakyanam 
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Original:  Srimad Bhagavadgita Sivaravindam Mahabashyam Vedanta Darsanam Upanishad Swadyayam (Three parts) Bhashya Pradeepam Brahmasutra Bashyanuvadham Vasishtasudha – Yogavasishta Saaram Bhagavata Hrudayam Panchadashi Jeevanmukti Vivekam Harinamakeerthanan – interpretation Jnanappana – interpretation Prawdanubhoothi Prakarana Prakashika Sources A weblog dedicated to the works and life of Prof.
Revised:  Srimad Bhagavadgita Sivaravindam Mahabashyam Vedanta Darsanam Upanishad Swadyayam (Three parts) Bhashya Pradeepam Brahmasutra Bashyanuvadham Vasishtasudha – Yogavasishta Saaram Bhagavata Hrudayam Panchadashi Jeevanmukti Vivekam Harinamakeerthanan – interpretation Jnanappana – interpretation Prawdanubhoothi Prakarana Prakashika References A weblog dedicated to the works and life of Prof.
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Original:  If the observer is far-sighted, the speckles appear to move in the same direction as the head moves , since in this case the surface image is focused behind the retina.
Revised:  If the observer is far-sighted, the speckles appear to move in the opposite direction as the head moves , since in this case the surface image is focused behind the retina.
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Original:  If the observer is far-sighted, the speckles appear to move in the same direction as the head moves , since in this case the surface image is focused behind the retina.
Revised:  If the observer is far-sighted, the speckles appear to move in the same direction as the surface , since in this case the surface image is focused behind the retina.
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Original: Laser speckle can be employed as a method for conducting a very sensitive eye test  Ennos AE, 1996, Phys.
Revised: Laser speckle can be employed as a method for conducting a very sensitive eye test . Ennos AE, 1996, Phys.
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Original:  Educ, 31, 138-142 .
Revised:  Educ, 31, 138-142 
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Original:  If the observer has perfect vision, the image of the surface is also formed on the retina, and movement of the head will result in the speckle pattern and the surface moving together so that the speckle pattern remains stationary with respect to the background.
Revised:  If the observer has perfect vision, the image of the surface is also formed on the retina, and movement of the head will result in the speckle pattern and the surface moving together so that the speckle pattern remains stationary with respect to the URL
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Original:  If the observer has perfect vision, the image of the surface is also formed on the retina, and movement of the head will result in the speckle pattern and the surface moving together so that the speckle pattern remains stationary with respect to the URL
Revised:  If the observer has perfect vision, the image of the surface is also formed on the retina, and movement of the head will result in the speckle pattern and the surface moving together so that the speckle pattern remains stationary with respect to the background.
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Original: Troubleshooting '' is a form of problem solving, often applied to repair failed products or processes on a machine or a system.
Revised: Troubleshooting is a form of problem solving, often applied to repair failed products or processes on a machine or a system.
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Original:  For example, knowing that an intermittent problem occurs "within" ''' an hour of a particular stimulus or event ... but that sometimes it happens in five minutes and other times it takes almost an hour ... does not constitute a "known procedure" even if the stimulus does increase the frequency of observable exhibitions of the symptom.
Revised:  For example, knowing that an intermittent problem occurs "within" an hour of a particular stimulus or event ... but that sometimes it happens in five minutes and other times it takes almost an hour ... does not constitute a "known procedure" even if the stimulus does increase the frequency of observable exhibitions of the symptom.
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Original:  Features which add redundancy, fault detection and failover to a system may also be subject to failure, and enough different component failures in any system will "take it down."
Revised:  Features which add redundancy, fault detection and failover to a system may also be subject to failure, and enough different component failures in any system will "take it down."
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Original:  For example, intermittent breaks in conductors --- or "dirty or loose contacts" might simply need to be cleaned and/or tightened.
Revised:  For example, intermittent breaks in conductors or "dirty or loose contacts" might simply need to be cleaned and/or tightened.
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Original:  More complex systems contain cyclical dependencies or interactions (feedback loops)  .
Revised:  More complex systems contain cyclical dependencies or interactions feedback loop .
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Original:  More complex systems contain cyclical dependencies or interactions (feedback loops)  .
Revised:  More complex systems contain cyclical dependencies or interactions (feedback loops) s .
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Original:  Comprehensive documentation produced by proficient technical writers  is very helpful, especially if it provides a theory of operation for the subject device or system.
Revised:  Comprehensive documentation produced by proficient technical writers is very helpful, especially if it provides a theory of operation for the subject device or system.
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Original:  Comprehensive documentation produced by proficient technical writers  is very helpful, especially if it provides a theory of operation for the subject device or system.
Revised:  Comprehensive documentation produced by proficient technical writer is very helpful, especially if it provides a theory of operation for the subject device or system.
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Original:  Comprehensive documentation produced by proficient technical writers  is very helpful, especially if it provides a theory of operation for the subject device or system.
Revised:  Comprehensive documentation produced by proficient technical writers s is very helpful, especially if it provides a theory of operation for the subject device or system.
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Original: Multiple problems Isolating single component failures which cause reproducible symptoms is relatively straightforward.
Revised: Multiple problems Isolating single component failures that cause reproducible symptoms is relatively straightforward.
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