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Original:  The Pourtugese had trading stations at Rio Pongo and Rio Nunez, mostly for the purchase of enslaved Africans captured inland and brought to the coast.
Revised:  The Portuguese had trading stations at Rio Pongo and Rio Nunez, mostly for the purchase of enslaved Africans captured inland and brought to the coast.
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Original: The Imamate of Futa Jallon was located mainly in present day Guinea as well as parts of Guinea Bissau, Senegal, and Sierra Leone.
Revised: The Imamate of Futa Jallon was located mainly in present-day Guinea as well as parts of Guinea Bissau, Senegal, and Sierra Leone.
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Original: Integrated Management of Childhood Illness of IMCI is a systematic approach to children's health which focuses on the whole child.
Revised: Integrated Management of Childhood Illness , or IMCI, is a systematic approach to children's health which focuses on the whole child.
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Original: Integrated Management of Childhood Illness , or IMCI, is a systematic approach to children's health which focuses on the whole child.
Revised: Integrated Management of Childhood Illness (IMCI) is a systematic approach to children's health which focuses on the whole child.
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Original:  In addition, it also has an objective to help improve health systems.
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Original: The Inequalities of Child Health Although the annual number of deaths among children less than 5 years old has decreased by almost a third since the 1970s, this reduction has not been evenly distributed throughout the world.
Revised: Inequalities of child health Although the annual number of deaths among children less than 5 years old has decreased by almost a third since the 1970s, this reduction has not been evenly distributed throughout the world.
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Original: The Inequalities of Child Health Although the annual number of deaths among children less than 5 years old has decreased by almost a third since the 1970s, this reduction has not been evenly distributed throughout the world.
Revised: The Inequalities of Child Health Although the annual number of deaths among children less than five years old has decreased by almost a third since the 1970s, this reduction has not been evenly distributed throughout the world.
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Original:  According to the 1999 World Health Report, children in low- to middle-income countries are 10 times more likely to die before reaching age 5 than children living in the industrialized world.
Revised:  According to the 1999 World Health Report, children in low- to middle-income countries are 10 times more likely to die before reaching age five than children living in the industrialized world.
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Original:  Seven in 10 of these deaths are due to acute respiratory infections (mostly pneumonia), diarrhea, measles, malaria, or malnutrition — and often to a combination of these conditions
Revised:  Seven in 10 of these deaths are due to acute respiratory infections (mostly pneumonia), diarrhea, measles, malaria, or malnutrition – and often to a combination of these conditions
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Original: Rationale for an Evidence-based Syndromic Approach to Case Management Many well-known prevention and treatment strategies have already proven effective for saving young lives.
Revised: Rationale for an evidence-based syndromic approach to case management Many well-known prevention and treatment strategies have already proven effective for saving young lives.
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Original:  Although the major reason for developing the IMCI strategy stemmed from the needs of curative care, the strategy also addresses aspects of nutrition, immunization, and other important elements of disease prevention and health promotion.
Revised:  Although the major reason for developing the IMCI strategy was the needs of curative care, the strategy also addresses aspects of nutrition, immunization, and other important elements of disease prevention and health promotion.
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Original:  The IMCI clinical guidelines target children less than 5 years old — the age group that bears the highest burden of deaths from common childhood diseases.
Revised:  The IMCI clinical guidelines target children less than five years old – the age group that bears the highest burden of deaths from common childhood diseases.
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Original:  The World Health Organization (WHO ) also published the "Integrated Management of Pregnancy and Childbirth  (IMPAC) " which included newborn and neonatal care guidelines as a continuum of care for both the mother and child in postnatal period. 
Revised:  The WHO also published the "Integrated Management of Pregnancy and Childbirth (IMPAC) " which included newborn and neonatal care guidelines as a continuum of care for both the mother and child in postnatal period. 
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Original:  The World Health Organization (WHO ) also published the "Integrated Management of Pregnancy and Childbirth  (IMPAC) " which included newborn and neonatal care guidelines as a continuum of care for both the mother and child in postnatal period. 
Revised:  The World Health Organization (WHO ) also published the "Integrated Management of Pregnancy and Childbirth " (IMPAC) " which included newborn and neonatal care guidelines as a continuum of care for both the mother and child in postnatal period. 
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Original:  The World Health Organization (WHO ) also published the "Integrated Management of Pregnancy and Childbirth  (IMPAC) " which included newborn and neonatal care guidelines as a continuum of care for both the mother and child in postnatal period. 
Revised:  The World Health Organization (WHO ) also published the "Integrated Management of Pregnancy and Childbirth (IMPAC) , which included newborn and neonatal care guidelines as a continuum of care for both the mother and child in postnatal period. 
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Original:  The World Health Organization (WHO ) also published the "Integrated Management of Pregnancy and Childbirth  (IMPAC) " which included newborn and neonatal care guidelines as a continuum of care for both the mother and child in postnatal period. 
Revised:  The World Health Organization (WHO ) also published the "Integrated Management of Pregnancy and Childbirth (IMPAC) " which included newborn and neonatal care guidelines as a continuum of care for both the mother and child in postnatal period. Integrated Management of Pregnancy and Childbirth (IMPAC)
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Original: This page cannot be found This means focusing not only on curative care but also on prevention of disease.
Revised: This means focusing not only on curative care but also on prevention of disease.
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Original: Criticisms The Human Shield Movement was criticised for what many saw as being an overt act of aiding Saddam Hussein’s regime . Charges of the shields being "dupes" and "useful idiots" for Saddam were widespread in the U.S. The participants argued that while various governments around the globe carry out acts of aggression, the human shield action was aimed at averting one.
Revised: Criticisms The Human Shield Movement was criticised for what many saw as being an overt act of aiding Saddam Hussein’s governance . Charges of the shields being "dupes" and "useful idiots" for Saddam were widespread in the U.S. The participants argued that while various governments around the globe carry out acts of aggression, the human shield action was aimed at averting one.
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Original:  The Iraqi regime was also criticised for encouraging and facilitating the human shield actions, since this was a violation of international law and Protocol I, article 20 of the Geneva Convention.
Revised:  The Iraqi government was also criticised for encouraging and facilitating the human shield actions, since this was a violation of international law and Protocol I, article 20 of the Geneva Convention.
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Original:  “ It was the right thing to do, ” claimed Eric Levy who was at Dura oil refinery in southern Baghdad for the duration of the air campaign.
Revised:  " It was the right thing to do, ” claimed Eric Levy who was at Dura oil refinery in southern Baghdad for the duration of the air campaign.
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Original:  “ It was the right thing to do, ” claimed Eric Levy who was at Dura oil refinery in southern Baghdad for the duration of the air campaign.
Revised:  “ It was the right thing to do, " claimed Eric Levy who was at Dura oil refinery in southern Baghdad for the duration of the air campaign.
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Original:  “ The war was illegal and immoral.
Revised:  " The war was illegal and immoral.
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Original:  We may have failed to stop the invasion, but by putting ourselves in harm ’ s way, we sent a clear message to the world.
Revised:  We may have failed to stop the invasion, but by putting ourselves in harm ' s way, we sent a clear message to the world.
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Original: 144px|Ken O'Keefe, founder of the action In December 2002  Kenneth O'Keefe, an ex-U.S. Marine and Gulf War veteran who had attempted multiple times to renounce his U.S. citizenship, posted a call to action for large numbers of western citizens to migrate to Iraq and deploy themselves as "Human Shields".
Revised: 144px|Ken O'Keefe, founder of the action In December 2002 , Kenneth O'Keefe, an ex-U.S. Marine and Gulf War veteran who had attempted multiple times to renounce his U.S. citizenship, posted a call to action for large numbers of western citizens to migrate to Iraq and deploy themselves as "Human Shields".
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Original: Criticisms The Human Shield Movement was criticised for what many saw as being an overt act of aiding Saddam Hussein’s governance.
Revised: Criticisms The Human Shield Movement was criticized for what many saw as being an overt act of aiding Saddam Hussein’s governance.
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Original:  The Iraqi government was also criticised for encouraging and facilitating the human shield actions, since this was a violation of international law and Protocol I, article 20 of the Geneva Convention.
Revised:  The Iraqi government was also criticized for encouraging and facilitating the human shield actions, since this was a violation of international law and Protocol I, article 20 of the Geneva Convention.
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Original:  "It was the right thing to do," claimed Eric Levy who was at Dura oil refinery in southern Baghdad for the duration of the air campaign . "The war was illegal and immoral.
Revised:  "It was the right thing to do," claimed Eric Levy who was at Dura oil refinery in southern Baghdad for the duration of the air campaign : "The war was illegal and immoral.
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Original: 144px|Ken O'Keefe, founder of the action In December 2002, Kenneth O'Keefe, an ex-U.S. Marine and Gulf War veteran who had attempted multiple times to renounce his U.S. citizenship, posted a call to action for large numbers of western citizens to migrate to Iraq and deploy themselves as "Human Shields".
Revised: 144px|Ken O'Keefe, founder of the action In December 2002, Kenneth O'Keefe, an ex-US marine and Persian Gulf War veteran who had attempted multiple times to renounce his U.S. citizenship, posted a call to action for large numbers of western citizens to migrate to Iraq and deploy themselves as "Human Shields".
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Original:  This was to be the cause of some conflict with their Iraqi host, Dr. Abdul Razak al-Hashimi, Saddam Hussein's spokesman during the first Gulf War, and head of the Friendship, Peace and Solidarity organisation which was hosting the activists under the authority of the Baathist government.
Revised:  This was to be the cause of some conflict with their Iraqi host, Dr. Abdul Razak al-Hashimi, Saddam Hussein's spokesman during the first Gulf War, and head of the Friendship, Peace and Solidarity organisation which was hosting the activists under the authority of the Ba'athist Iraqi government.
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Original: 240px|Human shields black bus, 25 January 2003Human shield action to Iraq was a group of people who travelled to Iraq to act as human shields with the aim of preventing the U.S.-led coalition troops from bombing certain locations during the 2003 invasion of Iraq.
Revised: 240px|Human shields black bus, 25 January 2003Human shield action to Iraq was a group of people who traveled to Iraq to act as human shields with the aim of preventing the U.S.-led coalition troops from bombing certain locations during the 2003 invasion of Iraq.
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Original: 240px|Human shields black bus, 25 January 2003Human shield action to Iraq was a group of people who travelled to Iraq to act as human shields with the aim of preventing the U.S.-led coalition troops from bombing certain locations during the 2003 invasion of Iraq.
Revised: 240px|Human shields black bus, 25 January 2003Human shield action to Iraq was a group of people who travelled to Iraq to act as human shields with the aim of preventing the U.S.-led coalition forces from bombing certain locations during the 2003 invasion of Iraq.
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Original:  Jonah Goldberg claimed after a debate with O'Keefe, that "O'Keefe and his friends are objectively in favour of Saddam Hussein and his murderous regime because they believe he is uniquely worth defending with their bodies.
Revised:  Jonah Goldberg claimed after a debate with O'Keefe, that "O'Keefe and his friends are objectively in favor of Saddam Hussein and his murderous regime because they believe he is uniquely worth defending with their bodies.
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Original:  Before his deportation he repeatedly alleged U.S. and British support for Hussein during some of his worst crimes ;
Revised:  Before his deportation he repeatedly alleged U.S. and British support for Hussein during some of his most notorious atrocities ;
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Original: On December 7, 2015, two Operation Iraqi Freedom/Operation Enduring Freedom veterans, Bryant Jacobs and Ed Salau, will be the first in America to get a percutaneous osseointegrated prosthesis.
Revised: On December 7, 2015, two Operation Iraqi Freedom/Operation Enduring Freedom veterans, Bryant Jacobs and Ed Salau, became the first in America to get a percutaneous osseointegrated prosthesis.
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Original:  During the first stage, doctors at Salt Lake Veterans Affairs Hospital will embed a titanium stud in the femur of each patient.
Revised:  During the first stage, doctors at Salt Lake Veterans Affairs Hospital embedded a titanium stud in the femur of each patient.
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Original:  About six weeks later, they will go back and attach the docking mechanism for the prosthesis.
Revised:  About six weeks later, they went back and attached the docking mechanism for the prosthesis.
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Original: Biomet Orthopedics, Regenerex® Porous Titanium Construct, URL Orthopedics, Trabeluar Metal Technology, URL  Cancellous-Structured Titanium Porous Coating, URL Clinical studies on mammals have shown that porous metals, such as titanium foam, may allow the formation of vascular systems within the porous area.
Revised: Biomet Orthopedics, Regenerex® Porous Titanium Construct, URL Orthopedics, Trabeluar Metal Technology, URL Zimmer Cancellous-Structured Titanium Porous Coating, URL Clinical studies on mammals have shown that porous metals, such as titanium foam, may allow the formation of vascular systems within the porous area.
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Original:  Career Shubert started her career with CNN as a producer in Jakarta, Indonesia, where she covered the fall of Indonesia’s President Suharto in 1998 , East Timor’ s transition to independence in 1999.
Revised:  Career Shubert started her career with CNN as a producer in Jakarta, Indonesia, where she covered the fall of Indonesia’s President Suharto in 1998 and East Timor' s transition to independence in 1999.
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Original:  CNN claims that Shubert was one of the first CNN correspondents to report on the 2004 Indian Ocean earthquake and resulting tsunami, reporting from Aceh, Indonesia, where she was vacationing at the time.
Revised:  CNN claims that Shubert was one of the first CNN correspondents to report on the 2004 Indian Ocean earthquake and tsunami, reporting from Aceh, Indonesia, where she was vacationing at the time.
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Original:  Also in Indonesia, Shubert covered a number of major new events that included the 2002 Bali bombings, the fall of Indonesian President Abdurrahman Wahid and the inauguration of President Megawati Sukarnoputri , East Timor's transition to independence, the resurgence of the Free Aceh separatist movement,  the religious conflict in Ambon City and the fall of former Indonesian President Suharto and resulting reform movement . Shubert also briefly covered the Schapelle Corby verdict in Bali;
Revised:  Also in Indonesia, Shubert covered a number of major new events that included the 2002 Bali bombings, the fall of President Abdurrahman Wahid and the inauguration of President Megawati Sukarnoputri , East Timor's transition to independence, the resurgence of the Free Aceh separatist movement, the religious conflict in Ambon City and the fall of former Indonesian President Suharto and resulting reform movement . Shubert also briefly covered the Schapelle Corby verdict in Bali;
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Original:  Also in Indonesia, Shubert covered a number of major new events that included the 2002 Bali bombings, the fall of Indonesian President Abdurrahman Wahid and the inauguration of President Megawati Sukarnoputri , East Timor's transition to independence, the resurgence of the Free Aceh separatist movement,  the religious conflict in Ambon City and the fall of former Indonesian President Suharto and resulting reform movement . Shubert also briefly covered the Schapelle Corby verdict in Bali;
Revised:  Also in Indonesia, Shubert covered a number of major new events that included the 2002 Bali bombings, the fall of Indonesian President Abdurrahman Wahid and the inauguration of President Megawati Sukarnoputri , East Timor's transition to independence, the resurgence of the Free Aceh separatist movement, and the religious conflict in Ambon City and the fall of former Indonesian President Suharto and resulting reform movement . Shubert also briefly covered the Schapelle Corby verdict in Bali;
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Original: Interview with Julian Assange In October , 2010, Shubert interviewed WikiLeaks founder Julian Assange shortly after his organization released classified US military documents related to the Iraq War.
Revised: Interview with Julian Assange In October 2010, Shubert interviewed WikiLeaks founder Julian Assange shortly after his organization released classified US military documents related to the Iraq War.
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Original: Atika Lynn Shubert (born August 2 , 1970) is a CNN correspondent based in Valencia, Spain.
Revised: Atika Lynn Shubert (born 2 , 1970) is a CNN correspondent based in Valencia, Spain.
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Original: #E9E9E9" ! colspan="2" style="width: 200px"|Party ! style="width: 170px"|Candidate ! style="width: 40px"|Votes ! style="width: 40px"|\%! style="width: 40px"| +/- | class="wikitable" |- style="background-color:#E9E9E9" ! colspan="6"| Ontario general election, 1987 |- style="background-color:#E9E9E9" ! colspan="2" style="width: 200px"|Party ! style="width: 170px"|Candidate ! style="width: 40px"|Votes ! style="width: 40px"|\%! style="width: 40px"| +/-
Revised: #E9E9E9" ! colspan="2" style="width: 200px"|Party ! style="width: 170px"|Candidate ! style="width: 40px"|Votes ! style="width: 40px"|\%! style="width: 40px"| +/- | class="wikitable" |- style="background-color:#E9E9E9" ! colspan="6"| Ontario general election, 1987PartyCandidateVotes\% +/-
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Original:  The book explores three points of divergence: the Black Death, the Korean War, and the influence of Ducci 
Revised:  The book explores three points of divergence: the Black Death, the Korean War, and the influence of Duccio. 
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Original:  Egypt had been very much in the French sphere of influence until 1882 when the British occupied Egypt.
Revised:  Egypt had been very much in the French sphere of influence until 1882 when the British occupied Egypt.
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Original:  Russian support for Ethiopia also led to a Russian Red Cross mission, which arrived in Addis Ababa some three months after Menelik's Adwa victory .
Revised:  Russian support for Ethiopia also led to a Russian Red Cross mission, which arrived in Addis Ababa some three months after Menelik's Adwa victory 
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Original: Egypt had  been very much in the French sphere of influence until 1882 when the British occupied Egypt.
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Original:  Russian support for Ethiopia also led to a Russian Red Cross mission, which arrived in Addis Ababa some three months after Menelik's Adwa victory   .
Revised:  Russian support for Ethiopia also led to a Russian Red Cross mission, which arrived in Addis Ababa some three months after Menelik's Adwa victory . .
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Original:  The project took over 5 years to URL The 3 parts mini series, uses archive footage and features 30 people who knew him or had interesting encounter with him to shed light on Ghotbzadeh's character and tell fascinating stories about his activities both before and after the Iranian Revolution that led to his death sentence.
Revised:  The project took over 5 years to complete. The 3 parts mini series, uses archive footage and features 30 people who knew him or had interesting encounter with him to shed light on Ghotbzadeh's character and tell fascinating stories about his activities both before and after the Iranian Revolution that led to his death sentence.
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Original:  Son of the revolution Part 1Son of the revolution Part 2Son of the revolution Part 3
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Original:  A True Inside Story of Revolution, Love And Treachery In Iran, (Unwin Hyman , 1989 ) Following the Iranian Revolution Ghotbzadeh became a member of the revolutionary council when Bazargan and others left the council to form an interim government.
Revised:  A True Inside Story of Revolution, Love And Treachery In Iran, (Unwin Hyman ) Following the Iranian Revolution Ghotbzadeh became a member of the revolutionary council when Bazargan and others left the council to form an interim government.
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Original:  Abrahamian, Ervand , Tortured Confessions, (University of California Press , 1999 ), p. 156 This was criticised by a group of Iranian intellectuals and also the interim government.
Revised:  Ervand Abrahamian. (1999). Tortured Confessions, (University of California Press , 1999 ), p. 156 This was criticised by a group of Iranian intellectuals and also the interim government.
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Original:  Abrahamian, Ervand , Tortured Confessions, (University of California Press , 1999 ), p. 156 This was criticised by a group of Iranian intellectuals and also the interim government.
Revised:  Abrahamian, Ervand , Tortured Confessions, (University of California Press ), p. 156 This was criticised by a group of Iranian intellectuals and also the interim government.
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