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Original: text-align:left;padding-left:1em;"| Abu Bakar dan Umaru (b. 1902) |- | January 1984 || May 2014 ||style="text-align:left;padding-left:1em;"| Shehu Usman Abubakar I- I June 2014 IIstyle="text-align:left;padding-left:1em;"I Abubakar Shehu Abubakar III (b. 1977) I
Revised: text-align:left;padding-left:1em;"| Abu Bakar dan Umaru (b. 1902) |- | January 1984 || May 2014 ||style="text-align:left;padding-left:1em;"| Shehu Usman Abubakar I- I June 2014 IIstyle="text-align:left;padding-left:1em;"I Abubakar Shehu Abubakar III (b. 1977) 
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Original:  History 1930's During the economic crisis of the 30's the organisation remained large however was not met with great enthousiasm by the colonial government.
Revised:  History 1930s During the economic crisis of the 30's the organisation remained large however was not met with great enthousiasm by the colonial government.
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Original:  History 1930's During the economic crisis of the 30's the organisation remained large however was not met with great enthousiasm by the colonial government.
Revised:  History 1930's During the economic crisis of the 1930s the organisation remained large however was not met with great enthousiasm by the colonial government.
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Original:  Within the legal class of Europeans, therefore, there was clear social, cultural and mental distinction between the so called expatriate ‘Totok’ (full blooded) European and native ‘Indo’ (mixed) European.
Revised:  Within the legal class of Europeans, therefore, there was clear social, cultural and mental distinction between the so-called expatriate ‘Totok’ (full blooded) European and native ‘Indo’ (mixed) European.
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Original:  Simultaneously it also stated the aspiration to make that same authority redundant and endeavored to move control of the colony back to the Dutch East Indies, envisioning a self sufficient and independent dominion.
Revised:  Simultaneously it also stated the aspiration to make that same authority redundant and endeavored to move control of the colony back to the Dutch East Indies, envisioning a self-sufficient and independent dominion.
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Original:  Chapter II, P.75-76 ISBN 90-71042-44-8 After the economic crisis of 1929 Indos were the first to truly comprehend the profound change initiated by the so called ‘Dutch Ethical Policy’ (1900–1930).
Revised:  Chapter II, P.75-76 ISBN 90-71042-44-8 After the economic crisis of 1929 Indos were the first to truly comprehend the profound change initiated by the so-called ‘Dutch Ethical Policy’ (1900–1930).
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Original: Final years IEV / GIKI logos on the 1954 commemorative book cover.
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Original:  Chapter II, P.73 ISBN 90-71042-44-8 115px|Karel Zaalberg, founder of the IEV.
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Original:  Even IEV leaders that had previously advocated Indonesian citizenhsip now fled the country.
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Original: Early years A Criollo, Padilla was born in Chipirina, Upper Peru (now Chipirina, Chayanta Province, Bolivia)  in 1774, the son of a local landowner.
Revised: Early years A Criollo, Padilla was born in Chipirina, Upper Peru (now Chipirina, Chayanta Province, Bolivia) , in 1774, the son of a local landowner.
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Original:  Her father was Spanish and her mother was Chola (3/ 4ths Native, 1/ 4ths Spaniard).
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Original:  Her father was Spanish and her mother was Chola (3/ 4ths Native, 1/ 4ths Spaniard).
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Original: The United States of Colombia () was the name adopted in URL Retrieved 29 December URL Retrieved 29 December 2010. by the Rionegro Constitution for the Confederation Granadine , after years of civil war.
Revised: The United States of Colombia () was the name adopted in URL Retrieved 29 December URL Retrieved 29 December 2010. by the Rionegro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation , after years of civil war.
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Original: History The civil war of 1860-1862 resulted in the dissolution of the Confederation Granadine which had been subjected increasingly to efforts by conservatives to centralize rule over the federal states.
Revised: History The civil war of 1860-1862 resulted in the dissolution of the Granadine Confederation which had been subjected increasingly to efforts by conservatives to centralize rule over the federal states.
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Original: The United States of Colombia () was the name adopted in URL Retrieved 29 December URL Retrieved 29 December 2010. by the Rionegro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation, after years of civil war.
Revised: The United States of Colombia () was the name adopted in URL Retrieved 29 December 2010. by the Rionegro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation, after years of civil war.
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Original:  Colombia became a federal state itself composed of nine "sovereign states ".
Revised:  Colombia became a federal state itself composed of nine "sovereign states .”
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Original: The United States of Colombia () was the name adopted in 1863 by the Rionegro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation, after years of civil war.
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Original: The United States of Colombia () was the name adopted in 1863 by the Rionegro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation, after years of civil war.
Revised: The United States of Columbia () was the name adopted in 1863 by the Rionegro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation, after years of civil war.
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Original:  Colombia became a federal state itself composed of nine " sovereign states.
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Original:  Colombia became a federal state itself composed of nine " sovereign states.
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Original:  ” It comprised the present-day nations of Colombia and Panama and parts of northwestern Brazil.
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Original:  After several more years of intermittent civil wars, it was replaced by the more centralist Republic of Colombia in 1886, predecessor to modern Colombia.
Revised:  After several more years of intermittent civil wars, it was replaced by the more centralist Republica de Colombia in 1886, predecessor to modern Colombia.
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Original:  United States of Columbia () was the name adopted in 1863by the Rio Negro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation, after years of civil war.
Revised: The United States of Columbia () was the name adopted in 1863by the Rio Negro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation, after years of civil war.
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Original:  United States of Columbia () was the name adopted in 1863by the Rio Negro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation, after years of civil war.
Revised:  United States of Colombia () was the name adopted in 1863by the Rio Negro Constitution for the Granadine Confederation, after years of civil war.
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Original:  Columbia became a federal state itself composed of nine  sovereign states.
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Original:  Columbia became a federal state itself composed of nine  sovereign states.
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Original:   It comprised the present-day nations of Colombia and Panama and parts of northwestern Brazil.
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Original:  After several more years of intermittent civil wars, it was replaced by the more centralist Republica de Colombia in 1886, predecessor to modern Colombia.
Revised:  After several more years of intermittent civil wars, it was replaced by the more centralist Republic of Colombia in 1886, predecessor to modern Colombia.
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Original: Indos in the Waffen SS (1940-1945) File:Dutch Indo.jpg|Indo-Dutch member of SS Volunteer Grenadier-Brigade Landstorm Nederland A separate group in Dutch Waffen-SS volunteers were formed by the Dutch-Indos.
Revised: Indos in the Waffen SS (1940-1945) A separate group in Dutch Waffen-SS volunteers were formed by the Dutch-Indos.
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Original:  The early (pre-colonial) evolution of this hybrid Eurasian community in the East Indies commenced during the arrival of Portuguese traders in the 16th century and continued with the arrival of Dutch (VOC) traders in the 17th and 18th century.
Revised:  The earliest evidence of Eurasian communities in the East Indies commenced during the arrival of Portuguese traders in the 16th century and continued with the arrival of Dutch (VOC) traders in the 17th and 18th century.
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Original:  The early (pre-colonial) evolution of this hybrid Eurasian community in the East Indies commenced during the arrival of Portuguese traders in the 16th century and continued with the arrival of Dutch (VOC) traders in the 17th and 18th century.
Revised:  The early (pre-colonial) evolution of this hybrid Eurasian community in the East Indies coincides with the arrival of Portuguese traders in the 16th century and continued with the arrival of Dutch (VOC) traders in the 17th and 18th century.
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Original: External links Hirudolab Leechcraft in 19th Cen.
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Original: External links Leechcraft in 19th Cen.
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Original:   External links Leechcraft in nineteenth century British medicine See also Aquaculture
Revised:  References External links Leechcraft in nineteenth century British medicine See also Aquaculture
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Original:   External links Leechcraft in nineteenth century British medicine See also Aquaculture
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Original: FDA approves leeches as medical devices - msnbc
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Original: According to the legend, the son of Zanahary descended to Earth at a location named Nerinerina - source of the sovereign's Earthly name - to play with the vazimba , the reportedly primitive original inhabitants of Madagascar.
Revised: According to the legend, the son of Zanahary descended to Earth at a location named Nerinerina - source of the sovereign's Earthly name - to play with the Vazimba , the reportedly primitive original inhabitants of Madagascar.
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Original:  The vazimba were specifically warned not to cook Andrianerinerina's sheep because he couldn't consume their flesh, but one was nonetheless butchered and cooked in a stew that was served to him.
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Original:  As a consequence, Zanahary gave the vazimba a choice: to "untie the threads of their lives" or to accept Andrianerinerina as their lord and master.
Revised:  As a consequence, Zanahary gave the Vazimba a choice: to "untie the threads of their lives" or to accept Andrianerinerina as their lord and master.
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Original: According to the legend, the son of Zanahary descended to Earth at a location named Nerinerina - source of the sovereign's Earthly name - to play with the Vazimba, the reportedly primitive original inhabitants of Madagascar.
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Original: According to the legend, the son of Zanahary descended to Earth at a location named Nerinerina - source of the sovereign's Earthly name - to play with the Vazimba, the reportedly primitive original inhabitants of Madagascar.
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Original:  History in Africa, 10, 247-292.
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Original: According to the legend, the son of Zanahary descended to Earth at a location named Anerinerina _( north of Angavokely) – source of the sovereign's Earthly name – to play with the Vazimba, the reportedly primitive original inhabitants of Madagascar.
Revised: According to the legend, the son of Zanahary descended to Earth at a location named Anerinerina ( north of Angavokely) – source of the sovereign's Earthly name – to play with the Vazimba, the reportedly primitive original inhabitants of Madagascar.
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Original:  Not since height of the Roman Empire had the black, red, caspian, and mediterranean seas been governed by a single empire - the Ottomans.
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Original:  Not since height of the Roman Empire had the Black, Red, Caspian, and Mediterranean seas been governed by a single empire - the Ottomans .
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Original:  Dictionary of Battles and Sieges by Tony Jaques xxxiv The war transformed the Ottoman Empire from a realm at the margins of the Islamic world, mainly located in Anatolia and the Balkans, to a huge empire encompassing much of the traditional lands of Islam, including the cities of Mecca, Cairo, Damascus, and Aleppo.
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Original:  Ottoman seapower and Levantine diplomacy in the age of discovery by Palmira Johnson Brummett p.52ff An earlier conflict, which lasted from 1485 to 1491, had led to a stalemate.
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Original:  By 1516, the Ottomans were free from other concerns—Sultan Selim I had just vanquished the Safavid Persians at the Battle of Chaldiran in 1514The Ottoman Empire: A Short History by Saraiya Faroqhi p.60ff —and turned their full might against the Mamluks, who ruled in Syria and Egypt, to complete the Ottoman conquest of the Middle East.
Revised:  By 1516, the Ottomans were free from other concerns—Sultan Selim I had just vanquished the Safavid Persians at the Battle of Chaldiran in 1514 —and turned their full might against the Mamluks, who ruled in Syria and Egypt, to complete the Ottoman conquest of the Middle East.
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Original:  Daily Life in Ancient and Modern Cairo by Joan D. Barghusen, Bob Moulder p.41 The Mamluks remained proud in their tradition and tended to disregard the usage of firearms.
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Original:  Firearms: A Global History to 1700 by Kenneth Warren Chase p.104 Operations in the Levant (1516) The Ottomans first captured the city of Diyarbekir in southeastern Anatolia.
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Original:  The Cambridge History of Egypt by M. W. Daly,Carl F. Petry p.498ff Operations in Egypt (1517) [[File:Early 16th century Ottoman volley gun.jpg| 200px|Ottoman volley gun with 9 barrels, early 16th century]] Al-Ghuri's successor as Mamluk sultan, Tuman Bay, frantically recruited troops from various classes of society and Bedouins, and attempted to equip his armies with some quantity of cannons and firearms, but all at the last minute and on a limited scale.
Revised:  Operations in Egypt (1517) [[File:Early 16th century Ottoman volley gun.jpg| 200px|Ottoman volley gun with 9 barrels, early 16th century]] Al-Ghuri's successor as Mamluk sultan, Tuman Bay, frantically recruited troops from various classes of society and Bedouins, and attempted to equip his armies with some quantity of cannons and firearms, but all at the last minute and on a limited scale.
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Original:  The Cambridge History of Egypt by M. W. Daly,Carl F. Petry p.498ff Operations in Egypt (1517) [[File:Early 16th century Ottoman volley gun.jpg| 200px|Ottoman volley gun with 9 barrels, early 16th century]] Al-Ghuri's successor as Mamluk sultan, Tuman Bay, frantically recruited troops from various classes of society and Bedouins, and attempted to equip his armies with some quantity of cannons and firearms, but all at the last minute and on a limited scale.
Revised:  The Cambridge History of Egypt by M. W. Daly,Carl F. Petry p.498ff Operations in Egypt (1517) [[File:Early 16th century Ottoman volley gun.jpg| upOttoman volley gun with 9 barrels, early 16th century]] Al-Ghuri's successor as Mamluk sultan, Tuman Bay, frantically recruited troops from various classes of society and Bedouins, and attempted to equip his armies with some quantity of cannons and firearms, but all at the last minute and on a limited scale.
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Original:  E. J. Brill's First Encyclopaedia of Islam, 1913–1936 by Martijn Theodoor Houtsma p.432 In this battle, Selim I and Tuman Bay faced each other.
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Original:  Ottoman Seapower and Levantine Diplomacy in the age of discovery by Palmira Johnson Brummett p.110 Operations in Red Sea (1517) The Ottoman fleet of Selman Reis was already stationed in the Red Sea by 1517.
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Original:  As a consequence the Sharif of Mecca, Barakat ibn Muhammad also submitted to the Ottomans eight years later, placing the holy cities of Mecca and Medina under Ottoman rule as a Vassal state, while Jeddah became a direct Beylerbeyliks to the Ottoman URL Consequences [[File:
Revised:  As a consequence the Sharif of Mecca, Barakat ibn Muhammad also submitted to the Ottomans eight years later, placing the holy cities of Mecca and Medina under Ottoman rule as a Vassal state, while Jeddah became a direct Beylerbeyliks to the Ottoman Empire. Consequences [[File:
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Original: Ottoman helmet made in Saint Irene arsenal Constantinople circa 1520.jpg| 150px|Ottoman helmet, with markings of Saint-Irene arsenal, Constantinople, c. 1520, Musée de l'Armée]] Mamluk culture and social organization persisted at a regional level, and the hiring and education of Mamluk "slave" soldiers continued, but the ruler of Egypt was an Ottoman governor protected by an Ottoman militia.
Revised: Ottoman helmet made in Saint Irene arsenal Constantinople circa 1520.jpg| upOttoman helmet, with markings of Saint-Irene arsenal, Constantinople, c. 1520, Musée de l'Armée]] Mamluk culture and social organization persisted at a regional level, and the hiring and education of Mamluk "slave" soldiers continued, but the ruler of Egypt was an Ottoman governor protected by an Ottoman militia.
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Original:  Islamic Monuments in Cairo: The Practical Guide by Caroline Williams p.6 The fall of the Mamluk Sultanate effectively put an end to the Portuguese–Mamluk naval war, but the Ottomans then took over the attempts to stop Portuguese expansion in the Indian Ocean.
Revised:  The fall of the Mamluk Sultanate effectively put an end to the Portuguese–Mamluk naval war, but the Ottomans then took over the attempts to stop Portuguese expansion in the Indian Ocean.
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Original:  However, Mecca and Medina were the most important of all the cities conquered since it officially made Selim and his descendents the Caliphs of the entire Muslim world until the early 20th century.
Revised:  However, Mecca and Medina were the most important of all the cities conquered since it officially made Selim and his descendants the Caliphs of the entire Muslim world until the early 20th century.
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Original:  The view inside could be an exhibition of any kind of pictures, objects, puppets or whatever a travelling showman thought customers would pay for to look at . A showman often provided dramatic narration and by pulling some strings or with simple mechanisms backgrounds could change or figures could be made to move or be replaced.
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Original:  Much of the production for a live-action movie is similar tot that of a theatre play, with very similar contributions by actors, a theatre director/film director, producers, a set designer, lighting designer, costume designer, composer, etc.
Revised:  Much of the production for a live-action movie is similar to that of a theatre play, with very similar contributions by actors, a theatre director/film director, producers, a set designer, lighting designer, costume designer, composer, etc.
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Original:  It has been suggested that distortions in the shapes of animals in many paleolithic cave paintings were possibly based on distortions seen in pinhole images formed through tiny holes in tents or in screens of animal URL Some ancient sightings of gods and spirits,
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Original:  especially in temple worship, are thought to possibly have been conjured up by means of camera obscura or proto magic lantern URL In Arab and European science the camera obscura was used in darkened rooms since circa 1000 CE to study light and especially sun eclipses.
Revised:  especially in temple worship, are thought to possibly have been conjured up by means of camera obscura or proto magic lantern projections. In Arab and European science the camera obscura was used in darkened rooms since circa 1000 CE to study light and especially sun eclipses.
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