wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  While he was crying a Jalpari appears from the pond than she helps to find his axe and she goes down in the pond than she offers him a Gold Axe then says is this your axeDaurey say my apologies but that isn't my axe.
Revised:  While he was crying a Jalpari appears from the pond than she helps to find his axe . She goes down in the pond than she offers him a Gold Axe then says is this your axeDaurey say my apologies but that isn't my axe.
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Original:  Than she offers him his axe than Daurey says that is my axeand says thank you for finding my axe.
Revised:  Than she offers him his axe and Daurey says that is my axeand says thank you for finding my axe.
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Original:  Jalpari gets so impressed by his loyalty than she gives him gold and silver axe which he sells to buy a good house.
Revised:  Jalpari gets so impressed by his honesty, rewarding him with gold and a silver axe which he sells to buy a good house.
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Original:  Than his neighbourwas curious how he had managed buy good housethan he tells him what had happened than his neighbour see that a money making.
Revised:  His neighbour, curious as to how he had managed buy good housethan he tells him what had happened than his neighbour see that a money making.
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Original:  Than Jalpari appearsoffer him a silver axe then he says that's not my axethan she offers him a gold axe then he says that is my axe then jalpariget so mad at him and says that isn't your axe and i'm not helping you to find the axe.
Revised:  The Jalpari appears, offering him a silver axe then he says that's not my axethan she offers him a gold axe then he says that is my axe then jalpariget so mad at him and says that isn't your axe and i'm not helping you to find the axe.
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Original:  Than Jalpari appearsoffer him a silver axe then he says that's not my axethan she offers him a gold axe then he says that is my axe then jalpariget so mad at him and says that isn't your axe and i'm not helping you to find the axe.
Revised:  Than Jalpari appearsoffer him a silver axe , and he says it is not his axe. She then offers him a gold axe then he says that is my axe then jalpariget so mad at him and says that isn't your axe and i'm not helping you to find the axe.
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Original:  Than Jalpari appearsoffer him a silver axe then he says that's not my axethan she offers him a gold axe then he says that is my axe then jalpariget so mad at him and says that isn't your axe and i'm not helping you to find the axe.
Revised:  Than Jalpari appearsoffer him a silver axe then he says that's not my axethan she offers him a gold axe , which he claims is his. The jalpari, seeing his lie, becomes angered and refuses to help him find his axe.
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Original:  This is adaptation of a older story, Panchatantra, about a woodcutter who is rewarded by a goddess for his honesty.
Revised:  This is adaptation of an older story, Panchatantra, about a woodcutter who is rewarded by a goddess for his honesty.
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Original:  His brother-in-law, the Reverend Carl Henry Clerk (1895–1982) was a Ghanaian agricultural educator , administrator, journalist, editor and Presbyterian minister who was elected the fourth Synod Clerk of the Presbyterian Church of the Gold Coast from 1950 to 1954.
Revised:  His brother-in-law, the Rev. Carl Henry Clerk (1895–1982) was a Ghanaian agricultural educator , administrator, journalist, editor and Presbyterian minister who was elected the fourth Synod Clerk of the Presbyterian Church of the Gold Coast from 1950 to 1954.
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Original:  His brother-in-law, the Reverend Carl Henry Clerk (1895–1982) was a Ghanaian agricultural educator , administrator, journalist, editor and Presbyterian minister who was elected the fourth Synod Clerk of the Presbyterian Church of the Gold Coast from 1950 to 1954.
Revised:  His brother-in-law, the Reverend Carl Henry Clerk (1895–1982) was an agricultural educator and Presbyterian minister who was elected the fourth Synod Clerk of the Presbyterian Church of the Gold Coast from 1950 to 1954.
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Original: Alumni of the Accra Academy Category:University of Ghana alumni Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:Ga-Adangbe people Category:Ghanaian civil servants Category:Ghanaian diplomats Category:Heads of schools in Ghana Category:Permanent Representatives of Ghana to the United Nations Category:Ghanaian Presbyterians Category:Ghanaian Protestants Category:People from Accra Category:Recipients of the Order of the Volta Category:Recipients of the Order of the Star of Gha
Revised: Alumni of the Accra Academy Category:University of Ghana alumni Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:Ga-Adangbe people Category:Ghanaian civil servants Category:Ghanaian diplomats Category:Heads of schools in Ghana Category:Permanent Representatives of Ghana to the United Nations Category:Ghanaian Presbyterians Category:Ghanaian Protestants Category:People from Accra Category:Recipients of the Order of the Volta Category:Recipients of the Order of the Star of Ghana Category:Ghanaian presidential adviso
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Original:  Under the leadership of Ignatius Kutu Acheampong and the National Redemption Council (NRC) , Nathan Quao served as the Secretary to the Council and Head of the Civil Service, retiring in 1973.
Revised:  Under the leadership of Ignatius Kutu Acheampong , Nathan Quao served as the Secretary to the Council and Head of the Civil Service, retiring in 1973.
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Original:  Under the leadership of Ignatius Kutu Acheampong and the National Redemption Council (NRC) , Nathan Quao served as the Secretary to the Council and Head of the Civil Service, retiring in 1973.
Revised:  Under the leadership of Ignatius Kutu Acheampong and the National Redemption Council (NRC) , Nathan Quao served as the Secretary to the National Redemption Council (NRC) and Head of the Civil Service, retiring in 1973.
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Original:  He held the positions of Secretary to the Presidential Commission in 1969 and Secretary to the Council of State in 1970 and subsequently Secretary to the Prime Minister in the Busia government of the Second Republic.
Revised:  He held the positions of Secretary to the Presidential Commission in 1969 and Secretary to the Council of State in 1970 and subsequently Secretary to the President of the Second Republic.
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Original: Nicholas Timothy Clerk (3 March 1930 – 22 September 2012) was a Ghanaian academic, administrator and Presbyterian minister who from 1977 to 1982, served as the Rector of the Ghana Institute of Management and Public Administration (GIMPA) , the country's principal graduate school of public policy, public administration and governance.
Revised: Nicholas Timothy Clerk (3 March 1930 – 22 September 2012) was a Ghanaian academic, administrator and Presbyterian minister who served as the Rector of the Ghana Institute of Management and Public Administration (GIMPA) , the country's principal graduate school of public policy, public administration and governance.
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Original:  Today, it is the country's principal graduate school of public policy, public administration and governance.
Revised:  Today, GIMPA is the country's principal graduate school of public policy, public administration and governance.
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Original:  Today, it is the country's principal graduate school of public policy, public administration and governance.
Revised:  Today, it is the country's principal school of public policy, public administration and governance.
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Original:  Like tooth whitening it is used to remove discolorations of the tooth surface but microabrasion is a mechanical, rather than chemical , procedure.
Revised:  Like tooth whitening it is used to remove discolorations of the tooth surface but microabrasion is a both a mechanical and chemical procedure.
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Original:  Like tooth whitening it is used to remove discolorations of the tooth surface but microabrasion is a both a mechanical and chemical procedure.
Revised:  Like tooth whitening it is used to remove discolorations of the tooth surface but microabrasion is both a mechanical and chemical procedure.
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Original:  Thus, it is sometimes known as the Neuman-Minnigerode-Curie Principle.
Revised:  Thus, it is sometimes known as the Neuman–Minnigerode–Curie Principle.
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Original: "Banu Si'lat" (children of Si'lat myth) In pre-Islamic Arabia , there was said to be one man who fell in love with a si'lat and had children who are known as "Banu Si'lat" It was rumored that the Arab population was conceived from descendants of 'Amr ibn Yarbu's' children who were half-si'lat.
Revised: "Banu Si'lat" (children of Si'lat myth) In pre-Islamic Arab countries , there was said to be one man who fell in love with a si'lat and had children who are known as "Banu Si'lat" It was rumored that the Arab population was conceived from descendants of 'Amr ibn Yarbu's' children who were half-si'lat.
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Original:  Domboshaba has a  well called the Mantenge Well which never dries up: the well is 7 metres deep and is situated in the rock.
Revised:  Domboshaba has a natural well called the Mantenge Well which never dries up: the well is 7 metres deep and is situated in the rock.
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Original:  Domboshaba has a natural  well called the Mantenge Well which never dries up: the well is 7 metres deep and is situated in the rock.
Revised:  Domboshaba has a natural water well called the Mantenge Well which never dries up: the well is 7 metres deep and is situated in the rock.
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Original: The URL - Prioritizing Positivity (Simon-Thomas Lecture).pdf of happiness predicts both positive emotions and less depressive symptoms.
Revised: The pursuit of happiness predicts both positive emotions and less depressive symptoms.
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Original:  In adolescence There has been a significant focus in past research on adulthood, in regards to well-being and development  and although eudaimonia is not a new field of study, there has been little research done in the areas of adolescence and youth.
Revised:  In adolescence There has been a significant focus in past research on adulthood, in regards to well-being and development , and although eudaimonia is not a new field of study, there has been little research done in the areas of adolescence and youth.
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Original:  Also , there is growing debate that assumptions that a single population estimate of age-related changes in well-being truly reflects the lived experiences of older adults has been questioned.
Revised:  Additionally , there is growing debate that assumptions that a single population estimate of age-related changes in well-being truly reflects the lived experiences of older adults has been questioned.
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Original:  Following a traumatic event, for instance rape, incest, cancer, attack, or combat, "it is normal to experience debilitating symptoms of depression and anxiety."
Revised:  Following a traumatic event, such as rape, incest, cancer, attack, or combat, "it is normal to experience debilitating symptoms of depression and anxiety."
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Original:  A person who shows PTG  however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time  and then show an increase in well-being , higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
Revised:  A person who shows PTG , however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time and then show an increase in well-being , higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
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Original:  A person who shows PTG  however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time  and then show an increase in well-being , higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
Revised:  A person who shows PTG however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time , and then show an increase in well-being , higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
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Original:  A person who shows PTG  however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time  and then show an increase in well-being , higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
Revised:  A person who shows PTG however, will experience these negative outcomes for a time and then show an increase in well-being that is higher than it was before the trauma occurred.
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Original:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: understand the response to trauma , reduce anxiety , utilize constructive disclosure , create a trauma narrative , and articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
Revised:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: Understand the response to trauma , reduce anxiety , utilize constructive disclosure , create a trauma narrative , and articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
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Original:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: understand the response to trauma , reduce anxiety , utilize constructive disclosure , create a trauma narrative , and articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
Revised:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: understand the response to trauma Reduce anxiety Utilize constructive disclosure Create a trauma narrative , and articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
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Original:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: understand the response to trauma , reduce anxiety , utilize constructive disclosure , create a trauma narrative , and articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
Revised:  When reflecting on a traumatic growth, Seligman suggests using the following five elements to facilitate PTG: understand the response to trauma , reduce anxiety , utilize constructive disclosure , create a trauma narrative Articulate life principles and stances that are more robust to challenge.
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Original:  While a 2012 study found that wellbeing was higher for people who experienced both positive and negative emotions, evidence  suggests negative emotions can be damaging.
Revised:  While a 2012 study found that wellbeing was higher for people who experienced both positive and negative emotions, evidence also suggests negative emotions can be damaging.
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Original:  The encountered benefits of flourishing suggest a definition: "[flourishing] people experience high levels of emotional, psychological and social well being due to vigor and vitality, self-determination, continuous self- growth , close relationships and a meaningful and purposeful life" (Siang-Yang, 2006, p. 70).
Revised:  The encountered benefits of flourishing suggest a definition: "[flourishing] people experience high levels of emotional, psychological and social well being due to vigor and vitality, self-determination, continuous self-growth , close relationships and a meaningful and purposeful life" (Siang-Yang, 2006, p. 70).
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Original:  This includes an ability of emotional Hedonic Adaptation , an idea suggesting that beauty, fame and money do not generally have lasting effects on happiness (this effect has also been called the Hedonic treadmill).
Revised:  This includes an ability of emotional hedonic adaptation , an idea suggesting that beauty, fame and money do not generally have lasting effects on happiness (this effect has also been called the Hedonic treadmill).
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Original:  This includes an ability of emotional Hedonic Adaptation , an idea suggesting that beauty, fame and money do not generally have lasting effects on happiness (this effect has also been called the Hedonic treadmill).
Revised:  This includes an ability of emotional Hedonic Adaptation , an idea suggesting that beauty, fame and money do not generally have lasting effects on happiness (this effect has also been called the hedonic treadmill).
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Original:  People whose set points lean toward positive emotionality tend to be cheerful most of the time  and those whose set points tend to be more negative emotionality tend to gravitate toward pessimism and anxiety.
Revised:  People whose set points lean toward positive emotionality tend to be cheerful most of the time , and those whose set points tend to be more negative emotionality tend to gravitate toward pessimism and anxiety.
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Original:  People whose set points lean toward positive emotionality tend to be cheerful most of the time  and those whose set points tend to be more negative emotionality tend to gravitate toward pessimism and anxiety.
Revised:  People whose set points lean toward positive emotionality tend to be cheerful most of the time and those whose set points lean toward negative emotionality tend to gravitate toward pessimism and anxiety.
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Original:  Lykken found that we can influence our level of well-being by creating environments more conductive to feelings of happiness  and by working with our genetic makeup.
Revised:  Lykken found that we can influence our level of well-being by creating environments more conductive to feelings of happiness , and by working with our genetic makeup.
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Original:  Diener explains that the recipe for happiness for an individual always requires  genetics, environment , and behaviour too , so it is nonsensical to claim that an individual's happiness is due to only one ingredient.
Revised:  Diener explains that the recipe for happiness for an individual always requires genetics, environment and behaviours , so it is nonsensical to claim that an individual's happiness is due to only one ingredient.
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Original:  The "flow" In the 1970s  Csikszentmihalyi's started to study flow, a state of absorption where one's abilities are well-matched to the demands at-hand.
Revised:  The "flow" In the 1970s , Csikszentmihalyi's started to study flow, a state of absorption where one's abilities are well-matched to the demands at-hand.
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Original:  The effect of challenging situations means that flow is often temporarily exciting and variously stressful, but this is considered Eustress , which is also known as "good" stress.
Revised:  The effect of challenging situations means that flow is often temporarily exciting and variously stressful, but this is considered eustress , which is also known as "good" stress.
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Original:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
Revised:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
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Original:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
Revised:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way . Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
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Original:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
Revised:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action . There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
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Original:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
Revised:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities . Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
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Original:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
Revised:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged . Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
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Original:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness , 6. Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
Revised:  Csikszentmihalyi identified nine indicator elements of flow: 1. Clear goals exist every step of the way , 2. Immediate feedback guides one's action , 3. There is a balance between challenges and abilities , 4. Action and awareness are merged , 5. Distractions are excluded from consciousness . Failure is not worrisome , 7. Self-consciousness disappears , 8. Sense of time is distorted , and 9.
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