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Original:  The MSRRA was written to amend the Servicemembers Civil Relief Act, to include protection of Military Spouses , with regards to voting, property and taxes, and provide equitable treatment of Military Spouses . Congressman Carter sponsored the bill after two Military Spouses, Army Spouse Rebecca Noah Poynter and Navy Spouse Joanna Williamson, approached him about residency concerns resulting from military moves and increasing deployments due to the War on Terrorism.
Revised:  The MSRRA was written to amend the Servicemembers Civil Relief Act, to include protection of military spouses , with regards to voting, property and taxes, and provide equitable treatment of Military Spouses . Congressman Carter sponsored the bill after two Military Spouses, Army Spouse Rebecca Noah Poynter and Navy Spouse Joanna Williamson, approached him about residency concerns resulting from military moves and increasing deployments due to the War on Terrorism.
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Original:  The MSRRA was written to amend the Servicemembers Civil Relief Act, to include protection of Military Spouses , with regards to voting, property and taxes, and provide equitable treatment of Military Spouses . Congressman Carter sponsored the bill after two Military Spouses, Army Spouse Rebecca Noah Poynter and Navy Spouse Joanna Williamson, approached him about residency concerns resulting from military moves and increasing deployments due to the War on Terrorism.
Revised:  The MSRRA was written to amend the Servicemembers Civil Relief Act, to include protection of Military Spouses , with regards to voting, property and taxes, and provide equitable treatment of military spouses . Congressman Carter sponsored the bill after two Military Spouses, Army Spouse Rebecca Noah Poynter and Navy Spouse Joanna Williamson, approached him about residency concerns resulting from military moves and increasing deployments due to the War on Terrorism.
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Original:  The MSRRA was written to amend the Servicemembers Civil Relief Act, to include protection of Military Spouses , with regards to voting, property and taxes, and provide equitable treatment of Military Spouses . Congressman Carter sponsored the bill after two Military Spouses, Army Spouse Rebecca Noah Poynter and Navy Spouse Joanna Williamson, approached him about residency concerns resulting from military moves and increasing deployments due to the War on Terrorism.
Revised:  The MSRRA was written to amend the Servicemembers Civil Relief Act, to include protection of Military Spouses , with regards to voting, property and taxes, and provide equitable treatment of Military Spouses . Congressman Carter sponsored the bill after two military spouses, Army spouse Rebecca Noah Poynter and Navy Spouse Joanna Williamson, approached him about residency concerns resulting from military moves and increasing deployments due to the War on Terrorism.
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Original:  The MSRRA was written to amend the Servicemembers Civil Relief Act, to include protection of Military Spouses , with regards to voting, property and taxes, and provide equitable treatment of Military Spouses . Congressman Carter sponsored the bill after two Military Spouses, Army Spouse Rebecca Noah Poynter and Navy Spouse Joanna Williamson, approached him about residency concerns resulting from military moves and increasing deployments due to the War on Terrorism.
Revised:  The MSRRA was written to amend the Servicemembers Civil Relief Act, to include protection of Military Spouses , with regards to voting, property and taxes, and provide equitable treatment of Military Spouses . Congressman Carter sponsored the bill after two Military Spouses, Army Spouse Rebecca Noah Poynter and Navy spouse Joanna Williamson, approached him about residency concerns resulting from military moves and increasing deployments due to the War on Terrorism.
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Original:  Military Spouses were required to become a resident of the state where they resided in contrast to service members that could maintain a home state.
Revised:  Military spouses were required to become a resident of the state where they resided in contrast to service members that could maintain a home state.
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Original:  During the Congressional bill process, Military Officers Association of America (MOAA) was the lead Veteran organization with these organizations also in support: American Legion Veterans of Foreign Wars Iraq and Afghanistan Veterans of America Air Force Sergeants Association Paralyzed Veterans of America AMVETS Vietnam Veterans of America The President of the United States, Barack Obama, issued a Press Release after he signed the bill.
Revised:  During the Congressional bill process, Military Officers Association of America (MOAA) was the lead veteran organization with these organizations also in support: American Legion Veterans of Foreign Wars Iraq and Afghanistan Veterans of America Air Force Sergeants Association Paralyzed Veterans of America AMVETS Vietnam Veterans of America The President of the United States, Barack Obama, issued a Press Release after he signed the bill.
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Original:  During the Congressional bill process, Military Officers Association of America (MOAA) was the lead Veteran organization with these organizations also in support: American Legion Veterans of Foreign Wars Iraq and Afghanistan Veterans of America Air Force Sergeants Association Paralyzed Veterans of America AMVETS Vietnam Veterans of America The President of the United States, Barack Obama, issued a Press Release after he signed the bill.
Revised:  During the Congressional bill process, Military Officers Association of America (MOAA) was the lead Veteran organization with these organizations also in support: American Legion Veterans of Foreign Wars Iraq and Afghanistan Veterans of America Air Force Sergeants Association Paralyzed Veterans of America AMVETS Vietnam Veterans of America The President of the United States, Barack Obama, issued a press release after he signed the bill.
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Original:  That is why a scientist at UC Berkley is working on a MRI "bra" to enable easier breast screening and the QT water breast Ultrasound is an viable option for those patients with dense breasts . RD Thoreson Schaefer BSRT (M) Health Radiation Instructor researcher .
Revised:  That is why a scientist at UC Berkley is working on an MRI "bra" to enable easier breast screening and the QT water breast Ultrasound is an viable option for those patients with dense breasts . RD Thoreson Schaefer BSRT (M) Health Radiation Instructor researcher .
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Original:  That is why a scientist at UC Berkley is working on a MRI "bra" to enable easier breast screening and the QT water breast Ultrasound is an viable option for those patients with dense breasts . RD Thoreson Schaefer BSRT (M) Health Radiation Instructor researcher .
Revised:  That is why a scientist at UC Berkley is working on a MRI "bra" to enable easier breast screening and the QT water breast Ultrasound is an viable option for those patients with dense breasts .
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Original:  That is why a scientist at UC Berkley is working on an MRI "bra" to enable easier breast screening and the QT water breast Ultrasound is an viable option for those patients with dense breasts.
Revised:  That is why a scientist at UC Berkeley is working on an MRI "bra" to enable easier breast screening and the QT water breast Ultrasound is an viable option for those patients with dense breasts.
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Original:  His most pioneering assignment was as Executive Director of 'Save-a-family Plan' , in Canada.
Revised:  He serves on the Board of Trustees of 'Save A Family Plan' organization in Canada.
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Original:  He has been serving in this capacity for the last thirteen and half years with utmost dedication and sincerity.
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Original:  His appointment as Bishop Auxiliary of Ernakulam-Angamaly and Titular Bishop of Macriana Maior (in ancient Byzantium, Turkey) was announced on 4 February 2002 and  was consecrated Bishop on 20 April 2002 by Major Archbishop Cardinal Mar Varkey Vithayathil at St Mary's Cathedral Basilica, Ernakulam. suspended from the post of Auxiliary Bishop of Ernakulam-Angamaly by Pope Francis on 26 June 2019.
Revised:  His appointment as Bishop Auxiliary of Ernakulam-Angamaly and Titular Bishop of Macriana Maior (in ancient Byzantium, Turkey) was announced on 4 February 2002 and he was consecrated Bishop on 20 April 2002 by Major Archbishop Cardinal Mar Varkey Vithayathil at St Mary's Cathedral Basilica, Ernakulam. suspended from the post of Auxiliary Bishop of Ernakulam-Angamaly by Pope Francis on 26 June 2019.
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Original:  On 30 August 2019, Adayanthrath, Archbishop George Alencherry and fellow Auxiliary Bishop Jose Puthenveetil were all removed from their positions in the Archdiocese of Ernakulam-Angamaly by Pope Francis in the wake of an investigation surrounding a controversial land deal which  resulted in the Archdiocese losing $10 URL Adayantharath has not faced criminal charges .
Revised:  On 30 August 2019, Adayanthrath, Archbishop George Alencherry and fellow Auxiliary Bishop Jose Puthenveetil were all removed from their positions in the Archdiocese of Ernakulam-Angamaly by Pope Francis in the wake of an investigation surrounding a controversial land deal which allegedly resulted in the Archdiocese losing $10 URL Adayantharath has not faced criminal charges .
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Original:  Mar Sebastian Adayanthrath appointed as Bishop of Syro malabar eparchy of Mandya by holy synod of syro malabar catholic church and pope francis on 30/08/2019.
Revised:  Mar Sebastian Adayanthrath appointed as Bishop of Mandya by holy synod of syro malabar catholic church and pope francis on 30/08/2019.
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Original:  Mar Sebastian Adayanthrath appointed as Bishop of Syro malabar eparchy of Mandya by holy synod of syro malabar catholic church and pope francis on 30/08/2019.
Revised:  Mar Sebastian Adayanthrath appointed as Bishop of Syro malabar eparchy of Mandya by the Holy Synod of Syro-Malabar Catholic Church and Pope Francis on 30th August URL
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Original:  He is the current Archbishop of Mandya and also a former Auxiliary Bishop of the Archdiocese of Ernakulam-Angamaly.
Revised:  He is the current bishop of Mandya and also a former Auxiliary Bishop of the Archdiocese of Ernakulam-Angamaly.
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Original:  He had his school education at St Joseph's L.P. School and St Theresa's High School, Vaikom from 1963 to 1973.
Revised:  He had his school education at St Joseph's LP School and St Theresa's High School, Vaikom from 1963 to 1973.
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Original:  Alencherry, Bishop Adayantharath did not face criminal charges and was later appointed as the Bishop of Syro-Malabar Eparchy of Mandya by the Holy Synod of Syro-Malabar Catholic Church and Pope Francis on 30 August URL
Revised:  Alencherry, Bishop Adayantharath did not face criminal charges and was later appointed as the Bishop of Syro-Malabar Eparchy of Mandya by the Holy Synod of Syro-Malabar Catholic Church and Pope Francis on 30 August 2019.
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Original:  Adayantharath took a Master's Degree in Theology from Jnana-Deepa Vidyapeeth, Pune.
Revised:  Adayantharath took a master's degree in Theology from Jnana-Deepa Vidyapeeth, Pune.
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Original:  The journeyman carried his belongings in a leather backpack called the Felleisen, but some medieval towns, Charlottenburg probably having been the first and there in particular the temporary homes dedicated to house journemen , banned those (for the fleas in them) so that most journeyman started to make use of a coarse cloth thus called Charlottenburger (abbreviated to "Charlie") to wrap up their belongings.
Revised:  The journeyman carried his belongings in a leather backpack called the Felleisen, but some medieval towns, Charlottenburg probably having been the first and there in particular the temporary homes dedicated to house journeymen , banned those (for the fleas in them) so that most journeyman started to make use of a coarse cloth thus called Charlottenburger (abbreviated to "Charlie") to wrap up their belongings.
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Original:  The development of late modern nations and their borders within Europe did not have much effect until the 19. century.
Revised:  The development of late modern nations and their borders within Europe did not have much effect until the 19th century.
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Original: At the beginning of the journey, the wanderer takes only a small, fixed sum of money with him (exactly five Deutschmarks was common, now five Euros);
Revised: At the beginning of the journey, the wanderer takes only a small, fixed sum of money with him (exactly five Deutsche Marks was common, now five Euros);
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Original: Psychoanalysis and Religion is a 1950 psychoanalytic treatise that attempts to explain the purpose and goals of psychoanalysis in relation to ethics and religion .
Revised: Psychoanalysis and Religion is a 1950 book by social psychologist and psychoanalyst Erich Fromm that attempts to explain the purpose and goals of psychoanalysis in relation to ethics and religion .
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Original:  However, such rejection is mainly on theological rather than psychoanalytic grounds, and therefore not sufficient to discredit Fromm's critique.
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Original:  133 Rosen, Fred Contract Warriors: How Mercenaries Changed History and the War on Terrorism Alpha (April 5, 2005) 7 April 1929 – 13 October 2007) was a French soldier of fortune and mercenary.
Revised:  133 Rosen, Fred Contract Warriors: How Mercenaries Changed History and the War on Terrorism Alpha (April 5, URL 7 April 1929 – 13 October 2007) was a French soldier of fortune and mercenary.
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Original:  " Robert Young Pelton 's The World's Most Dangerous Places: 5th Edition " , Robert Young Pelton, Collins Reference, 2003, p .270 : "Denard has seven wives and has at various times converted to Judaism (in Morocco) and Islam (in the Comoros) and then back to Catholicism."
Revised:  Robert Young Pelton 's The World's Most Dangerous Places: 5th Edition " , Robert Young Pelton, Collins Reference, 2003, p .270 : "Denard has seven wives and has at various times converted to Judaism (in Morocco) and Islam (in the Comoros) and then back to Catholicism."
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Original:  " Robert Young Pelton 's The World's Most Dangerous Places: 5th Edition " , Robert Young Pelton, Collins Reference, 2003, p .270 : "Denard has seven wives and has at various times converted to Judaism (in Morocco) and Islam (in the Comoros) and then back to Catholicism."
Revised:  " Robert Young Pelton The World's Most Dangerous Places: 5th Edition " , Robert Young Pelton, Collins Reference, 2003, p .270 : "Denard has seven wives and has at various times converted to Judaism (in Morocco) and Islam (in the Comoros) and then back to Catholicism."
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Original:  " Robert Young Pelton 's The World's Most Dangerous Places: 5th Edition " , Robert Young Pelton, Collins Reference, 2003, p .270 : "Denard has seven wives and has at various times converted to Judaism (in Morocco) and Islam (in the Comoros) and then back to Catholicism."
Revised:  " Robert Young Pelton 's The World's Most Dangerous Places: 5th Edition , Robert Young Pelton, Collins Reference, 2003, p .270 : "Denard has seven wives and has at various times converted to Judaism (in Morocco) and Islam (in the Comoros) and then back to Catholicism."
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Original:  " Robert Young Pelton 's The World's Most Dangerous Places: 5th Edition " , Robert Young Pelton, Collins Reference, 2003, p .270 : "Denard has seven wives and has at various times converted to Judaism (in Morocco) and Islam (in the Comoros) and then back to Catholicism."
Revised:  " Robert Young Pelton 's The World's Most Dangerous Places: 5th Edition " , Robert Young Pelton, Collins Reference, 2003, p . 270 : "Denard has seven wives and has at various times converted to Judaism (in Morocco) and Islam (in the Comoros) and then back to Catholicism."
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Original: Robert Denard (born Gilbert Bourgeaudp . 133 Rosen, Fred Contract Warriors: How Mercenaries Changed History and the War on Terrorism Alpha (April 5, URL 7 April 1929 – 13 October 2007) was a French soldier of fortune and mercenary.
Revised: Robert Denard (born Gilbert Bourgeaud;p . 133 Rosen, Fred Contract Warriors: How Mercenaries Changed History and the War on Terrorism Alpha (April 5, URL 7 April 1929 – 13 October 2007) was a French soldier of fortune and mercenary.
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Original:   A man and his dog TIME Magazine, August 21, 1978 The official story that Soilih was "shot while trying to escape" is not generally believed.
Revised:  " A man and his dog TIME Magazine, August 21, 1978 The official story that Soilih was "shot while trying to escape" is not generally believed.
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Original:   A man and his dog TIME Magazine, August 21, 1978 The official story that Soilih was "shot while trying to escape" is not generally believed.
Revised:  A man and his dog ". Time. August 21, 1978 The official story that Soilih was "shot while trying to escape" is not generally believed.
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Original:   A man and his dog TIME Magazine, August 21, 1978 The official story that Soilih was "shot while trying to escape" is not generally believed.
Revised:  A man and his dog TIME Magazine, August 21, 1978. The official story that Soilih was "shot while trying to escape" is not generally believed.
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Original:  Denard was in charge of his own unit of French mercenaries called les affreux ( lit.: the uglies ).
Revised:  Denard was in charge of his own unit of French mercenaries called les affreux ( the awful ones ).
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Original: The third Saudi state is the heir to the two Saudi states: the first and the second, founded on (January 15, 1902), by Abdul Aziz ibn Saud, who managed to restore the city of Riyadh to establish the modern and contemporary Saudi state (Kingdom of Saudi Arabia ).
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Original: The Third Saudi state is the heir to the two Saudi states: the first and the second, founded on (January 15, 1902), by Abdul Aziz ibn Saud, who managed to restore the city of Riyadh to establish the modern and contemporary Saudi state (Kingdom of Saudi Arabia ).
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Original:  Pp. 40. See also History of Saudi Arabia Unification of Saudi Arabia Emirate of Diriyah Emirate of Nejd Emirate of Nejd and Hasa Emirate of Jabal Shammar Sultanate of Nejd Kingdom of Hejaz Kingdom of Hejaz and Nejd%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External lin
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Original: Biography Hall was born on the Dakota Tipi First Nation reserve near Portage la Prairie, Manitoba on May 14, 1964.
Revised: Biography Hall was born on the reserve near Portage la Prairie, Manitoba on May 14, 1964.
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Original:  Due to his parents  work, he had an unstable childhood and little supervision.
Revised:  Due to his parents ' work, he had an unstable childhood and little supervision.
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Original:  According to his uncle Neil Hall, he was taken away by  Children's Aid and put into foster care at the age of three.
Revised:  According to his uncle Neil Hall, he was taken away by the Children's Aid and put into foster care at the age of three.
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Original:  Sayyed Abdollah Behbahāni and Sayyed Mohammad Tabātabā'i, in Persian, . He is the father of Sayyed Sādegh Tabātabā'i editor of Ruznāmeh-ye Majles, the Majles newspaper.
Revised:  He is the father of Sayyed Sādegh Tabātabā'i editor of Ruznāmeh-ye Majles, the Majles newspaper.
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Original:  Sayyed Abdollah Behbahāni and Sayyed Mohammad Tabātabā'i, ibid.
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Original:  Mangol Bayat, Iran’s First Revolution: Shi’ism and the Constitutional Revolution of 1905–1909, Studies in Middle Eastern History, 336 p. (Oxford University Press, 1991).
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Original:  Nikki R. Keddie, with a section by Yann Richard, Modern Iran - Roots and Results of Revolution, updated edition (Yale University Press, New Haven, 2003), p. 67.
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Original:  Nikkie R. Keddie, ibid, pp. 66 and 67.
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Original:  According to Keddie, Nikkie R. Keddie, ibid, p. 67. this lack of detail may have been intended for preserving unity amongst the more radical modernizers and the traditional Ulema.
Revised:  According to Keddie, this lack of detail may have been intended for preserving unity amongst the more radical modernizers and the traditional Ulema.
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Original:  Nikkie R. Keddie, ibid, p. 67.
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Original: According to Keddie, loc. cit., p. 180 , "The third main leader of the Tehran ulema, Shaikh Fazlollah Nuri [the other two being Mirzā Sayyed Mohammad Tabātabā'i and Ayatollah Sayyed Abdollah Behbahāni], did turn against the movement once it became clear that the constitution was not going to reinstate the sharia, but bring in many Western-style institutions and laws."
Revised: According to , "The third main leader of the Tehran ulema, Shaikh Fazlollah Nuri [the other two being Mirzā Sayyed Mohammad Tabātabā'i and Ayatollah Sayyed Abdollah Behbahāni], did turn against the movement once it became clear that the constitution was not going to reinstate the sharia, but bring in many Western-style institutions and laws."
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Original:  Nikkie R. Keddie, ibid.
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Original:  As private person According to Keddie, Sayyed Mohammad Tabātabā'i "appears to have had genuinely liberal proclivities and considerable contact with other liberals, believed that a constitution would be the best way to limit the power of uncontrolled autocrats who were selling Iran to the Western powers." Nikkie R. Keddie, ibid, p. 180.
Revised:  As private person According to Keddie, Sayyed Mohammad Tabātabā'i "appears to have had genuinely liberal proclivities and considerable contact with other liberals, believed that a constitution would be the best way to limit the power of uncontrolled autocrats who were selling Iran to the Western powers." 
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Original:  Sayyed Abdollah Behbahāni and Sayyed Mohammad Tabātabā'i, ibid. Note
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Original:  After some changes in this draft, if was finally ratified by Mozaffar al-Din Shah.
Revised:  After some changes in this draft, it was finally ratified by Mozaffar al-Din Shah.
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Original:  He was the son of Sayyed Sādegh Tabātabā'i, one of the influential clerics during the reign of Naser ad-Din Shah Qajar.
Revised:  He was the son of Sayyed Sādegh Tabātabā'i, one of the influential Scholar during the reign of Naser ad-Din Shah Qajar.
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Original: Thomas Andrew , circa 1919.
Revised: Thomas Andrew 
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Original:  Thomas Andrew (19 January 1855 - 7 August, 1939) was a New Zealand photographer who lived in Samoa from 1891 until his death in 1939.
Revised:  (19 January 1855 - 7 August, 1939) was a New Zealand photographer who lived in Samoa from 1891 until his death in 1939.
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Original:  A catheter may be in place for long periods of time (indwelling catheter) or removed after each use ( Intermittent catheterisation).
Revised:  A catheter may be in place for long periods of time (indwelling catheter) or removed after each use ( intermittent catheterisation).
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Original:  A clinician, often a nurse, usually performs the procedure, but self-catheterization is also possible  .
Revised:  A clinician, often a nurse, usually performs the procedure, but self-catheterization is also possible cuase .
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