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Original:  The rare species, previously known to birders only through drawings based on dead museum specimens collected several decades ago, was identified in a documentary filmed in the Philippines called " Bye-Bye Birdie."
Revised:  The rare species, previously known to birders only through drawings based on dead museum specimens collected several decades ago, was identified in a documentary filmed in the Philippines called Bye-Bye Birdie."
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Original:  The TV crew and Howie Severino had not realized what they filmed until WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British ornithologist, had spotted a photograph of the buttonquail in the credits of the team's recent  " Bye-Bye Birdie " documentary.
Revised:  The TV crew and Howie Severino had not realized what they filmed until Allen had informed the crew of interesting discovery. " Bye-Bye Birdie " documentary.
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Original:  Lu added. These Turnicidae  are small, drab, running birds, which avoid flying.
Revised:  Lu added. These Turnicidae '' are small, drab, running birds, which avoid flying.
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Original:  File:Dean_Conant_Worcester_1866-1924.jpg|Dean Conant Worcester Since then just a few single specimens have been photographed and filmed from Nueva Vizcaya and Benguet, and lately, in 2007, from Mountain Province by Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago, Illinois. 
Revised:  Since then just a few single specimens have been photographed and filmed from Nueva Vizcaya and Benguet, and lately, in 2007, from Mountain Province by Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago, Illinois. 
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Original:  File:Dean_Conant_Worcester_1866-1924.jpg|Dean Conant Worcester Since then just a few single specimens have been photographed and filmed from Nueva Vizcaya and Benguet, and lately, in 2007, from Mountain Province by Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago, Illinois. 
Revised:  File:Dean_Conant_Worcester_1866-1924.jpg|Dean Conant Worcester Since then just a few single specimens have been photographed and filmed from Nueva Vizcaya and Benguet, and lately, in 2007, from Mountain Province by Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago, Illinois. File:Dean_Conant_Worcester_1866-1924.jpg|Dean Conant Worcester
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Original: WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British birder, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, URL when he viewed a still image of the rare bird in the credits that lasted less than a second.
Revised: WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British birder, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, when he viewed a still image of the rare bird in the credits that lasted less than a second.
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Original:  Last month, native bird trappers have snared and caught the Luzon Buttonquail (Turnix worcesteri or Worcester's buttonquail) in Dalton Pass, a cold and wind-swept bird passageway in the Caraballo Mountains, in Nueva Vizcaya, located between Cordillera Central and Sierra Madre mountain ranges, in Northern Luzon.
Revised:  Last month, native bird trappers snared and successfully caught the Luzon Buttonquail (Turnix worcesteri or Worcester's buttonquail) in Dalton Pass, a cold and wind-swept bird passageway in the Caraballo Mountains, in Nueva Vizcaya, located between Cordillera Central and Sierra Madre mountain ranges, in Northern Luzon.
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Original:  "  WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British birder, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, when he viewed a still image of the rare bird in the credits that lasted less than a second.
Revised:  WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British birder, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, when he viewed a still image of the rare bird in the credits that lasted less than a second.
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Original:  "  WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British birder, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, when he viewed a still image of the rare bird in the credits that lasted less than a second.
Revised:  " British birder and WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British birder, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, when he viewed a still image of the rare bird in the credits that lasted less than a second.
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Original:  "  WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British birder, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, when he viewed a still image of the rare bird in the credits that lasted less than a second.
Revised:  " WBCP member, Desmond Allen, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, when he viewed a still image of the rare bird in the credits that lasted less than a second.
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Original:  "  WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British birder, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, when he viewed a still image of the rare bird in the credits that lasted less than a second.
Revised:  " WBCP member, Desmond Allen, a British birder, was watching a January 26 DVD-video of a documentary, Bye-Bye Birdie, when he viewed a still image of the credits that lasted less than a second.
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Original:  Allen created a screenshot of the bird , which was photographed by their birder-companion, Arnel Telesforo,  a WBCP member, in Nueva Vizcaya's poultry market, before it was cooked and eaten.
Revised:  Allen created a screenshot , which was photographed by their birder-companion, Arnel Telesforo, a WBCP member, in Nueva Vizcaya's poultry market, before it was cooked and eaten.
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Original:  Allen created a screenshot of the bird , which was photographed by their birder-companion, Arnel Telesforo,  a WBCP member, in Nueva Vizcaya's poultry market, before it was cooked and eaten.
Revised:  Allen created a screenshot of the bird , which was photographed by their birder-companion, Arnel Telesforo, also a WBCP member, in Nueva Vizcaya's poultry market, before it was cooked and eaten.
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Original:  " i-Witness: The GMA Documentaries " , a Philippine documentary news and public affairs television show aired by GMA Network, had incorporated Telesforo's photographs and video footage of the live bird in the documentary, that was created by the TV crew led by Mr Howie Severino.
Revised:  i-Witness: The GMA Documentaries " , a Philippine documentary news and public affairs television show aired by GMA Network, had incorporated Telesforo's photographs and video footage of the live bird in the documentary, that was created by the TV crew led by Mr Howie Severino.
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Original:  " i-Witness: The GMA Documentaries " , a Philippine documentary news and public affairs television show aired by GMA Network, had incorporated Telesforo's photographs and video footage of the live bird in the documentary, that was created by the TV crew led by Mr Howie Severino.
Revised:  " i-Witness: The GMA Documentaries , a Philippine documentary news and public affairs television show aired by GMA Network, had incorporated Telesforo's photographs and video footage of the live bird in the documentary, that was created by the TV crew led by Mr Howie Severino.
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Original:  [[File:Field_fg01.jpg|In 2007, a specimen of the the Luzon Buttonquail from the Mountain Province was photographed by the  Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago , Illinois, USA The Luzon Buttonquail was only known through an illustration in "A Guide to the Birds of the Philippines" by Robert S. Kennedy, et al, the Philippine birder's bible.
Revised:  [[File:Field_fg01.jpg|In 2007, a specimen of the the Luzon Buttonquail from the Mountain Province was photographed by the Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago . The Luzon Buttonquail was only known through an illustration in "A Guide to the Birds of the Philippines" by Robert S. Kennedy, et al, the Philippine birder's bible.
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Original:  [[File:Field_fg01.jpg|In 2007, a specimen of the the Luzon Buttonquail from the Mountain Province was photographed by the  Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago , Illinois, USA The Luzon Buttonquail was only known through an illustration in "A Guide to the Birds of the Philippines" by Robert S. Kennedy, et al, the Philippine birder's bible.
Revised:  [[File:Field_fg01.jpg|In 2007, a specimen of the the Luzon Buttonquail from the Mountain Province was photographed by the Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago , Illinois, USA The Luzon Buttonquail was only known through an illustration in the authoritative book by Robert S. Kennedy, et al, the Philippine birder's bible.
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Original:  The book has a drawing based on the skins of dead specimens  a century ago amid the fact that the authoritative image bank of the Oriental Bird Club does not contain a single image of the Worcester's Buttonquail.
Revised:  The book has a drawing based on the skins of dead specimens collected a century ago amid the fact that the authoritative image bank of the Oriental Bird Club does not contain a single image of the Worcester's Buttonquail.
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Original:  The book has a drawing based on the skins of dead specimens  a century ago amid the fact that the authoritative image bank of the Oriental Bird Club does not contain a single image of the Worcester's Buttonquail.
Revised:  The book has a drawing based on the skins of dead specimens a century ago , whereas the otherwise comprehensive image bank of the Oriental Bird Club does not contain a single image of the Worcester's Buttonquail.
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Original:  " With the photograph and the promise of more sightings in the wild, we can see the living bill, the eye color, the feathers, rather than just the mushed-up museum skin, " exclaimed Allen, who has been birdwatching for fifty years, fifteen in the Philippines, and has an extensive collection of bird calls on his ipod.
Revised:  “ With the photograph and the promise of more sightings in the wild, we can see the living bill, the eye color, the feathers, rather than just the mushed-up museum skin, " exclaimed Allen, who has been birdwatching for fifty years, fifteen in the Philippines, and has an extensive collection of bird calls on his ipod.
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Original:  " With the photograph and the promise of more sightings in the wild, we can see the living bill, the eye color, the feathers, rather than just the mushed-up museum skin, " exclaimed Allen, who has been birdwatching for fifty years, fifteen in the Philippines, and has an extensive collection of bird calls on his ipod.
Revised:  " With the photograph and the promise of more sightings in the wild, we can see the living bill, the eye color, the feathers, rather than just the mushed-up museum skin, ” exclaimed Allen, who has been birdwatching for fifty years, fifteen in the Philippines, and has an extensive collection of bird calls on his ipod.
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Original:  Since then just a few single specimens have been photographed and filmed from Nueva Vizcaya and Benguet, and lately, in 2007, from Mountain Province by  Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago, Illinois.
Revised:  Since then just a few single specimens have been photographed and filmed from Nueva Vizcaya and Benguet, and lately, in 2007, from Mountain Province by the Field Museum of Natural History in Chicago, Illinois.
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Original:  [[File:Dean_Conant_Worcester_1866-1924.jpg|Dean Conant Worcester]] In October, 2004, at the request of Mr Moises Butic, Lamut CENR Officer, Mr Jon Hornbuckle, of 35 Grove Road, Sheffield, has conducted a short investigation into bird-trapping in Ifugao, Mountain Province, Banaue Mount Polis, Sagada and Dalton Pass, in Nueva Vizcaya.
Revised:  [[File:Dean_Conant_Worcester_1866-1924.jpg|Dean Conant Worcester]] In October, 2004, at the request of Mr Moises Butic, Lamut CENR Officer, Mr Jon Hornbuckle, of Grove Road, Sheffield, has conducted a short investigation into bird-trapping in Ifugao, Mountain Province, Banaue Mount Polis, Sagada and Dalton Pass, in Nueva Vizcaya.
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Original:  In August, 1929, Richard C. McGregor and Leon L. Gardner of the Cooper Ornithological Society had authored a book entitled , " Philippine Bird Traps.
Revised:  In August, 1929, Richard C. McGregor and Leon L. Gardner of the Cooper Ornithological Society compiled a book entitled , " Philippine Bird Traps.
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Original:  In August, 1929, Richard C. McGregor and Leon L. Gardner of the Cooper Ornithological Society had authored a book entitled , " Philippine Bird Traps.
Revised:  In August, 1929, Richard C. McGregor and Leon L. Gardner of the Cooper Ornithological Society had authored a book entitled Philippine Bird Traps.
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Original:  " The authors have described the Luzon Buttonquail as "very rare," and found twice only , August and September.
Revised:  The authors described the Luzon Buttonquail as "very rare," and found twice only , August and September.
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Original:  " The authors have described the Luzon Buttonquail as "very rare," and found twice only , August and September.
Revised:  " The authors have described the Luzon Buttonquail as "very rare," having only encountered it twice, once in August and once in September.
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Original:  "The various ingenious and effectual devices used by Filipinos for bird-trapping include [ 'Teepee Trap' which consists of a conical tepee, woven of split bamboo and rattan about 3 feet high and 3 feet across at the base, with a fairly narrow entrance.
Revised:  "The various ingenious and effectual devices used by Filipinos for bird-trapping include [the 'Teepee Trap' which consists of a conical tepee, woven of split bamboo and rattan about 3 feet high and 3 feet across at the base, with a fairly narrow entrance.
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Original:  Additionally  a global assessment of the health of the world's species is released once in four years.
Revised:  Additionally , a global assessment of the health of the world's species is released once in four years.
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Original:  The data is compiled by 1,700 experts in 130 countries.
Revised:  The data is compiled by 1,700 experts from 130 countries.
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Original:  These Turnicidae '' are small, drab, running birds, which avoid flying.
Revised:  These Turnicidae are small, drab, running birds, which avoid flying.
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Original: File:PolanskiIFFKV.jpg|Roman Polanski at the Crystal Globe awards.
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Original:  Superior Court Judge Peter Espinoza has today rejected a motion by lawyers for French film director Roman Polanski to have charges of unlawful sex with a child dismissed.
Revised:  Judge Peter Espinoza has today rejected a motion by lawyers for French film director Roman Polanski to have charges of unlawful sex with a child dismissed.
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Original:  Superior Court Judge Peter Espinoza has today rejected a motion by lawyers for French film director Roman Polanski to have charges of unlawful sex with a child dismissed.
Revised:  Superior Court Judge Peter Espinoza has today rejected a motion by lawyers for French film director to have charges of unlawful sex with a child dismissed.
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Original:  In 1977, Polanski was arrested charged with sodomy, sexual assault and rape of a 13-year-old girl at Jack Nicholson 's house in California, United States.
Revised:  In 1977, Polanski was arrested charged with sodomy, sexual assault and rape of a 13-year-old girl at 's house in California, United States.
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Original:  Polanski agreed to plead guilty to unlawful sex with a child, often called statutory rape , in exchange for having the more serious charges dropped.
Revised:  Polanski agreed to plead guilty to unlawful sex with a child, often called , in exchange for having the more serious charges dropped.
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Original: A Bombardier Dash 8 Q400, similar to the aircraft involved in the incidentA recent investigation suggests that the pilot of a Continental Express turboprop commuter airliner that crashed in Buffalo last week may have put the aircraft into its plunge.
Revised: A Bombardier Dash 8 Q400, similar to the aircraft involved in the incidentA recent investigation suggests that the pilot of a Continental Express turboprop commuter airliner may have put the aircraft into its plunge.
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Original:  The investigation says that information from the flight data recorder on board the airplane indicated that the pilot's control column, the device which is used to steer the aircraft, was pulled upward abruptly, thereby causing the nose of the airplane to pitch up.
Revised:  A source close to the investigation says that information from the flight data recorder on board the airplane indicated that the pilot's control column, the device which is used to steer the aircraft, was pulled upward abruptly, thereby causing the nose of the airplane to pitch up.
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Original:  The pilot's training has now been put into question, and it was discovered that the captain, Marvin Renslow, aged 47, had logged only 110 hours in this particular aircraft . Continental Connection Flight 3407 crashed into a house in  a suburb of Buffalo , New York on February 12 in icy weather, killing all 49 people on board the airplane and one person on the ground  
Revised:  The pilot's training has now been put into question, and it was discovered that the captain, Marvin Renslow, aged 47, had logged only 110 hours in this particular aircraft . Continental Connection Flight 3407 crashed into a house in a suburb of Buffalo on February 12 in icy weather, killing all 49 people on board the airplane and one person on the ground 
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Original:  The pilot's training has now been put into question, and it was discovered that the captain, Marvin Renslow, aged 47, had logged only 110 hours in this particular aircraft . Continental Connection Flight 3407 crashed into a house in  a suburb of Buffalo , New York on February 12 in icy weather, killing all 49 people on board the airplane and one person on the ground  
Revised:  The pilot's training has now been put into question, and it was discovered that the captain, Marvin Renslow, aged 47, had logged only 110 hours in this particular aircraft . Continental Connection Flight 3407 crashed into a house in a suburb of Buffalo , New York on February 12 in icy weather, killing all 49 people on board the airplane and one person on the ground . 
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Original:  The pilot's training has now been put into question, and it was discovered that the captain, Marvin Renslow, aged 47, had logged only 110 hours in this particular aircraft . Continental Connection Flight 3407 crashed into a house in  a suburb of Buffalo , New York on February 12 in icy weather, killing all 49 people on board the airplane and one person on the ground  
Revised:  The pilot's training has now been put into question, and it was discovered that the captain, Marvin Renslow, aged 47, had logged only 110 hours in this particular aircraft . Continental Connection Flight 3407 crashed into a house in a suburb of Buffalo , New York on February 12 in icy weather, killing all 49 people on board the airplane and one person on the ground Related new
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Original: A source close to the investigation says that information from the flight data recorder on board the airplane indicated that the pilot's control column, the device which is used to steer the aircraft, was pulled upward abruptly, thereby causing the nose of the airplane to pitch up.
Revised: A source close to the investigation says that information from the flight data recorder on board the aeroplane indicated that the pilot's control column, the device which is used to steer the aircraft, was pulled upward abruptly, thereby causing the nose of the airplane to pitch up.
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Original: A source close to the investigation says that information from the flight data recorder on board the airplane indicated that the pilot's control column, the device which is used to steer the aircraft, was pulled upward abruptly, thereby causing the nose of the airplane to pitch up.
Revised: A source close to the investigation says that information from the flight data recorder on board the airplane indicated that the pilot's control column, the device which is used to steer the aircraft, was pulled upward abruptly, thereby causing the nose of the aeroplane to pitch up.
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Original:  In aviation, a stall is when the air no longer flows over the wings of an airplane , and the aircraft can no longer keep the lift necessary to keep it airborne, causing it to fall.
Revised:  In aviation, a stall is when the air no longer flows over the wings of an aeroplane , and the aircraft can no longer keep the lift necessary to keep it airborne, causing it to fall.
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Original:  The normal maneuver to recover from a stall for wing icing is to apply full power to the engines and push the nose down.
Revised:  The normal manoeuvre to recover from a stall for wing icing is to apply full power to the engines and push the nose down.
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Original:  After the airplane pulled up abruptly, it then pitched down at an angle of 31 degrees, rolling left and right, partially upside-down.
Revised:  After the aeroplane pulled up abruptly, it then pitched down at an angle of 31 degrees, rolling left and right, partially upside-down.
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Original:  This sort of stall is known as an aggravated stall, and it can be very difficult to return the airplane to normal flight from one.
Revised:  This sort of stall is known as an aggravated stall, and it can be very difficult to return the aeroplane to normal flight from one.
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Original:  In this case, the pilot had less than two thousand feet to do so before the aircraft impacted from the ground.
Revised:  In this case, the pilot had less than two thousand feet to do so before the aircraft crashed into the ground.
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Original:  Continental Connection Flight 3407 crashed into a house in Clarence Center, a suburb of Buffalo on February 12 in icy weather, killing all 49 people on board the airplane and one person on the ground.
Revised:  Continental Connection Flight 3407 crashed into a house in Clarence Center, a suburb of Buffalo on February 12 in icy weather, killing all 49 people on board the aeroplane and one person on the ground.
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Original: A Super Puma helicopter, similar to the one involved in the incidentWikinews has just learned that an helicopter with at eighteen people on board has ditched in the water while approaching an oil installation in the North Sea.
Revised: A Super Puma helicopter, similar to the one involved in the incident A helicopter with at eighteen people on board has ditched in the water while approaching an oil installation in the North Sea.
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Original: A Super Puma helicopter, similar to the one involved in the incident A helicopter with at eighteen people on board has ditched in the water while approaching an oil installation in the North Sea.
Revised: A Super Puma helicopter, similar to the one involved in the incident A helicopter with at eighteen people on board ditched in the water while approaching an oil installation in the North Sea.
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Original:  According to the coast guard , everyone on board the aircraft survived the crash, and have been picked up by two life-boats.
Revised:  According to Her Majesty's Coastguard , everyone on board the aircraft survived the crash, and have been picked up by two life-boats.
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Original:  Dave Webster,  the Royal Air Force squadron leader , said that this type of accident is a very rare occurrence.
Revised:  Dave Webster, a squadron leader with the Royal Air Force squadron leader , said that this type of accident is a very rare occurrence.
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Original:  Dave Webster,  the Royal Air Force squadron leader , said that this type of accident is a very rare occurrence.
Revised:  Dave Webster, the Royal Air Force , said that this type of accident is a very rare occurrence.
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