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Original: Chile's Interior Minister José Miguel Insulza has declared himself convinced that he has sufficient support in order to become the next Secretary General of the Organization of American States (OAS), and that he sees himself as a consensus candidate.
Revised: Chile's Interior Minister José Miguel Insulza has declared himself convinced that he has enough support to become the next Secretary General of the Organization of American States (OAS), and that he sees himself as a consensus candidate.
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Original:  He is clearly the left-wing one of the three officially declared candidates, the other two being El Salvador's Francisco Flores and Mexico's Luis Ernesto Derbez, so it comes as no surprise that he has the support of other South American left-wing governments.
Revised:  He is the more left-wing one of the three officially declared candidates, the other two being El Salvador's Francisco Flores and Mexico's Luis Ernesto Derbez, so it comes as no surprise that he has the support of other South American left-wing governments.
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Original:  He is clearly the left-wing one of the three officially declared candidates, the other two being El Salvador's Francisco Flores and Mexico's Luis Ernesto Derbez, so it comes as no surprise that he has the support of other South American left-wing governments.
Revised:  He is clearly the left-wing of the three officially declared candidates, the other two being El Salvador's Francisco Flores and Mexico's Luis Ernesto Derbez, so it comes as no surprise that he has the support of other South American left-wing governments.
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Original:  It remains to be seen whether he can gain consensus when the majority of member states comes from the north of the hemisphere, and are not left wing .
Revised:  It remains to be seen whether he can gain consensus of the of the member states .
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Original:  It is Francisco Flores who has the all important support of the USA. Reference URL Spanish websit
Revised:  It is Francisco Flores who has the important support of the USA. Reference URL Spanish websit
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Original:  It is Francisco Flores who has the all important support of the USA. Reference URL Spanish websit
Revised:  It is Francisco Flores who has the all important support of the USA. References URL Spanish websit
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Original:  It is Francisco Flores who has the important support of the USA  . References  URL
Revised:  It is Francisco Flores who has the important support of the USA . References URL URL
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Original:  It is Francisco Flores who has the important support of the USA, though some would see this as a disadvantage.
Revised:  It is Francisco Flores who has the important support of the USA, though some see this as a disadvantage.
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Original:  Meanwhile, the Conservative Party, buoyed by the election of David Cameron as Party Leader, saw their vote fall by 2.5\% The Scottish Socialist Party were also hit, registering a slight fall in their vote despite fielding a high-profile candidate in John McAllion, the former Labour MP and MSP for Dundee Eas
Revised:  Meanwhile, the Conservative Party, buoyed by the election of David Cameron as Party Leader, saw their vote fall by 2.5\% The Scottish Socialist Party were also hit, registering a slight fall in their vote despite fielding a high-profile candidate in John McAllion, the former Labour MP and MSP for Dundee East
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Original: Neil Entwistle, 27, appeared before a Magistrates' court today and agreed to be extradited to the United States to face double-murder  charges.
Revised: Neil Entwistle, 27, appeared before a Magistrates' court today and agreed to extradition to the United States to face double-murder charges.
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Original: Neil Entwistle, 27, appeared before a Magistrates' court today and agreed to be extradited to the United States to face double-murder  charges.
Revised: Neil Entwistle, 27, appeared before a Magistrates' court today and agreed to be extradited to the United States , where he will face double-murder charges.
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Original:  Entwistle is now the prime suspect in the murders of his wife Rachel, 27, and nine-month old baby daughter Lillian.
Revised:  Entwistle is now the prime suspect in the killings of his wife Rachel, 27, and nine-month old baby daughter Lillian.
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Original:  Both were shot to death and left under a pile of blankets in the bedroom of their home in Hopkinton, Massachusetts  .
Revised:  Both were shot to death and left under a pile of blankets in the bedroom of their Hopkinton, Massachusetts .
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Original:  Both were shot to death and left under a pile of blankets in the bedroom of their home in Hopkinton, Massachusetts  .
Revised:  Both were shot to death and left under a pile of blankets in the bedroom of their home in Hopkinton, Massachusetts home .
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Original:  Entwistle was reportedly planning a murder suicide, but decided not to kill himself and instead bought a one-way ticket to England where he was with family 
Revised:  Entwistle was reportedly planning a murder-suicide. Instead, police believe he fled to England, where he was with family 
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Original:  At her confirmation hearings to be appointed the next U.S. Secretary of States , Condoleeza Rice said she is committed to mending international relations and to continued troop support in Iraq
Revised:  At her confirmation hearings to be appointed the next U.S. Secretary of State , Condoleeza Rice said she is committed to mending international relations and to continued troop support in Iraq
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Original:  At her confirmation hearings to be appointed the next U.S. Secretary of State, Condoleeza Rice said she is committed to mending international relations and to continued troop support in Iraq
Revised:  At her confirmation hearings to be appointed the next U.S. Secretary of State, Condoleezza Rice said she is committed to mending international relations and to continued troop support in Iraq
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Original:  This is his seventh surgery since then   .
Revised:  This is his seventh surgery since then . .
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Original:   Reports also say that doctors have removed part of Sharon's intestinal system  .
Revised:  An Aid and hospital officials say that part of Sharon's intestinal system .
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Original: An Aid and hospital officials say that part of   Sharon's intestinal system, which was badly damaged , was removed.
Revised: Yesterday doctors treating Sharon had noticed a swollen abdomine and ordered a CT scan on his torsou and found the damage to his intestine. Later tests had shown that part of Sharon's intestinal system, which was badly damaged , was removed.
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Original:  The Chief Surgeon says , "Sharon is out of danger, for the moment.
Revised:  The Chief Surgeon said , "Sharon is out of danger, for the moment.
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Original:  Later tests had shown that part of the Large Intestine had developed necrosis and needed to be immediately removed.
Revised:  Later tests had shown that part of the large intestine had developed necrosis and needed to be immediately removed.
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Original:   Mor-Yosef , hospital spokesman said in a press conference that there were "no complications" during surgery.
Revised:  Mor-Yosef stated a press conference that there were "no complications" during surgery.
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Original:  Doctors removed at least 50cm of the Large intestine.
Revised:  Doctors removed at least 50cm of Sharon's large intestine.
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Original:  Yosef also said that the surgery is a "routine procedure" and "not a dramatic" procedure . "Hospitals perform these operations sometimes two or three times a day," he added.
Revised:  Yosef also said that the surgery was both a "routine procedure" and "not a dramatic" procedure . "Hospitals perform these operations sometimes two or three times a day," he added.
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Original:  Yosef also said that the surgery is a "routine procedure" and "not a dramatic" procedure . "Hospitals perform these operations sometimes two or three times a day," he added.
Revised:  Yosef also said that the surgery is a "routine procedure" and "not a dramatic" one . "Hospitals perform these operations sometimes two or three times a day," he added.
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Original:  Levy also said that Sharon's condition has "deteriorated to its most critical point since his admission."
Revised:  Levy also stated that Sharon's condition has "deteriorated to its most critical point since his admission."
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Original:  This is his seventh surgery since then . Sharon has been in the hospital for thirty-nine days  and has been on a feeding tube for two weeks.
Revised:  This is his seventh surgery since his hospitalization . Sharon has been in the hospital for thirty-nine days and has been on a feeding tube for two weeks.
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Original:  This is his seventh surgery since then . Sharon has been in the hospital for thirty-nine days  and has been on a feeding tube for two weeks.
Revised:  This is his seventh surgery since then . Sharon has been hospitalized for thirty-nine days and has been on a feeding tube for two weeks.
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Original:  This is his seventh surgery since then . Sharon has been in the hospital for thirty-nine days  and has been on a feeding tube for two weeks.
Revised:  This is his seventh surgery since then . Sharon has been in the hospital for thirty-nine days , and has been on a feeding tube for two weeks.
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Original:  If not  risk collapse not only of services but also morale at a time when most need both.
Revised:  If not , risk collapse not only of services but also morale at a time when most need both.
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Original: Hospitals must prepare their staff for the trauma from an outbreak of bird flu  .
Revised: Hospitals must prepare their staff for the trauma from an outbreak of bird flu , a medical expert advised today .
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Original:  If not, risk collapse not only of services but also  morale at a time when  most need both.
Revised:  If not, they risk the collapse not only of services but also morale at a time when most need both.
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Original:  If not, risk collapse not only of services but also  morale at a time when  most need both.
Revised:  If not, risk collapse not only of services but also of morale at a time when most need both.
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Original:  If not, risk collapse not only of services but also  morale at a time when  most need both.
Revised:  If not, risk collapse not only of services but also morale at a time when they most need both.
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Original:  He continues saying hospitals need to offer staff counseling and daily briefings in order to manage the stress.
Revised:  He said hospitals need to offer staff counseling and daily briefings in order to manage the stress.
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Original:  H5N1 avian flu virus has mostly affected birds, but at least 88 people in seven countries has died since the reemergence of the virus late 2003.
Revised:  H5N1 avian flu virus has mostly affected birds, but at least 88 people in seven countries have died since the reemergence of the virus late 2003.
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Original:  No evidence yet that the virus has mutated to point where humans can pass it on  but experts predict millions could die  . Gomersall insists hospitals need properly equipped facilities and trained staff now.
Revised:  There is no evidence yet that the virus has mutated to point where humans can pass it on but experts predict millions could die . Gomersall insists hospitals need properly equipped facilities and trained staff now.
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Original:  No evidence yet that the virus has mutated to point where humans can pass it on  but experts predict millions could die  . Gomersall insists hospitals need properly equipped facilities and trained staff now.
Revised:  No evidence yet that the virus has mutated to point where humans can pass it on , but experts predict millions could die . Gomersall insists hospitals need properly equipped facilities and trained staff now.
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Original:  No evidence yet that the virus has mutated to point where humans can pass it on  but experts predict millions could die  . Gomersall insists hospitals need properly equipped facilities and trained staff now.
Revised:  No evidence yet that the virus has mutated to point where humans can pass it on but experts predict millions could die if it does . Gomersall insists hospitals need properly equipped facilities and trained staff now.
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Original:  Once an epidemic starts there is  very short time between when symptoms present and admission to intensive care.
Revised:  Once an epidemic starts there is only a very short time between when symptoms present and admission to intensive care.
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Original: Thursday night (January, 13), the São Paulo 's police officers arrested four men in a supermarket in São Caetano do Sul.
Revised: Thursday night (January, 13), São Paulo 's police officers arrested four men in a supermarket in São Caetano do Sul.
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Original: Thursday night (January, 13), the São Paulo 's police officers arrested four men in a supermarket in São Caetano do Sul.
Revised: Thursday night (January, 13), the São Paulo police officers arrested four men in a supermarket in São Caetano do Sul.
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Original:  Thirteen prisoners were also wounded in the brawl, which occurred in the on Wednesday  
Revised:  Thirteen prisoners were also wounded in the brawl, which occurred in the on Wednesday . 
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Original:  One stated official spoke of deaths occurring due to clubs and stones being used as weapons.
Revised:  One anonymous state official spoke of deaths occurring due to clubs and stones being used as weapons.
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Original:  Adressing large crowds in Tehran, he attacked the notion of a referral to the United Nations Security Council, and the percieved bullying by the board of the International Atomic Energy Agency.
Revised:  Addressing large crowds in Tehran, he attacked the notion of a referral to the United Nations Security Council, and the percieved bullying by the board of the International Atomic Energy Agency.
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Original:  Adressing large crowds in Tehran, he attacked the notion of a referral to the United Nations Security Council, and the percieved bullying by the board of the International Atomic Energy Agency.
Revised:  Adressing large crowds in Tehran, he attacked the notion of a referral to the United Nations Security Council, and the perceived bullying by the board of the International Atomic Energy Agency.
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Original:  Overt nuclear weapons powers India and Pakistan and the suspected nuclear weapons power Israel are not parties to the NPT.
Revised:  India and Pakistan and the suspected nuclear weapons power Israel are not parties to the NPT.
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Original:  Overt nuclear weapons powers India and Pakistan and the suspected nuclear weapons power Israel are not parties to the NPT.
Revised:  Overt nuclear weapons powers India and Pakistan are not parties to the NPT.
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Original:  India, Pakistan, and Isreal are not parties to the NPT.
Revised:  India, Pakistan, and Isrealare not parties to the NPT.
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Original:  India, Pakistan, and Isrealare not parties to the NPT.
Revised:  India, Pakistan, and Isreal are not parties to the NPT.
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Original:  India, Pakistan, and Isreal are not parties to the NPT.
Revised:  India, Pakistan, and Israel are not parties to the NPT.
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Original: Coming on the anniversary of the 1979 Islamic Revolution, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad has said that if forced to limit its nuclear activities, Iran will altogether abandon the NPT .
Revised: Coming on the anniversary of the 1979 Islamic Revolution, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad has said that if forced to limit its nuclear activities, Iran will altogether abandon the .
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Original:  Addressing large crowds in Tehran , he attacked the notion of a referral to the United Nations Security Council, and the perceived bullying by the board of the International Atomic Energy Agency.
Revised:  Addressing large crowds in , he attacked the notion of a referral to the United Nations Security Council, and the perceived bullying by the board of the International Atomic Energy Agency.
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Original:  North Korea withdrew from the NPT on January 10, 2003.
Revised:  withdrew from the NPT on January 10, 2003.
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Original: The Craigslist , a popular free online classifieds site, has been sued for hosting discriminatory housing ads by the Chicago Lawyers' Committee for Civil Rights Under Law Inc., a fair housing group.
Revised: The craigslist , a popular free online classifieds site, has been sued for hosting discriminatory housing ads by the Chicago Lawyers' Committee for Civil Rights Under Law Inc., a fair housing group.
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Original:  Craigslist CEO Jim Buckmaster said "We admit that one or two postings per 100,000 are discriminatory" but explained that Craiglist's 19 employees could not physically screen the 8 million new ads posted each month.
Revised:  craigslist CEO Jim Buckmaster said "We admit that one or two postings per 100,000 are discriminatory" but explained that Craiglist's 19 employees could not physically screen the 8 million new ads posted each month.
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Original:  This claim appears based upon Section 230 of the Communications Decency Act which states that "No provider or user of an interactive computer service shall be treated as the publisher or speaker of any information provided by another information content provider.  
Revised:  This claim appears based upon Section 230 of the Communications Decency Act which states that "No provider or user of an interactive computer service shall be treated as the publisher or speaker of any information provided by another information content provider. " 
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Original: The housing ads cited as objectionable included such statments as "NO MINORITIES," "Requirements: Clean Godly Christian Male," and "Only Muslims apply." craigslist CEO Jim Buckmaster said "We admit that one or two postings per 100,000 are discriminatory" but explained that Craiglist 's 19 employees could not physically screen the 8 million new ads posted each month.
Revised: The housing ads cited as objectionable included such statements as "NO MINORITIES," "Requirements: Clean Godly Christian Male," and "Only Muslims apply." craigslist CEO Jim Buckmaster said "We admit that one or two postings per 100,000 are discriminatory" but explained that Craiglist 's 19 employees could not physically screen the 8 million new ads posted each month.
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Original: The housing ads cited as objectionable included such statments as "NO MINORITIES," "Requirements: Clean Godly Christian Male," and "Only Muslims apply." craigslist CEO Jim Buckmaster said "We admit that one or two postings per 100,000 are discriminatory" but explained that Craiglist 's 19 employees could not physically screen the 8 million new ads posted each month.
Revised: The housing ads cited as objectionable included such statments as "NO MINORITIES," "Requirements: Clean Godly Christian Male," and "Only Muslims apply." craigslist CEO Jim Buckmaster said "We admit that one or two postings per 100,000 are discriminatory" but explained that craiglist 's 19 employees could not physically screen the 8 million new ads posted each month.
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Original:  He claimed the "NO MINORITIES" ad was removed within two hours.
Revised:  Buckaster claimed the "NO MINORITIES" ad was removed within two hours.
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Original:  Buckmaster also said "It is our understanding that the law is very clear to the effect that sites like craigslist cannot be held legally liable for the content of postings submitted by end users."
Revised:  Buckmaster also said "It is our understanding that the law is very clear to the effect that sites like Craigslist cannot be held legally liable for the content of postings submitted by end users."
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Original:  Under section 7b of the website 's Terms of Service agreement, users are not allowed to post an ad "that violates the Fair Housing Act by stating, in any notice or ad for the sale or rental of any dwelling, a discriminatory preference based on race, color, national origin, religion, sex, familial status or handicap (or violates any state or local law prohibiting discrimination on the basis of these or other characteristics)"
Revised:  Under section 7b of the web site 's Terms of Service agreement, users are not allowed to post an ad "that violates the Fair Housing Act by stating, in any notice or ad for the sale or rental of any dwelling, a discriminatory preference based on race, color, national origin, religion, sex, familial status or handicap (or violates any state or local law prohibiting discrimination on the basis of these or other characteristics)"
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Original:  Originally, he wanted to go to a balcony and throw the bombs at a crowd exiting the Islamic center.
Revised:  Originally, he wanted to go to a balcony and throw the bombs at people at the Islamic center.
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Original: According to federal prosecutors, Lewis "Scooter" Libby Jr., the former chief of staff to Vice President Dick Cheney, told a grand jury that  superiors authorized him to disclose to reporters information from the U.S. National Intelligence Estimate.
Revised: According to federal prosecutors, Lewis "Scooter" Libby Jr., the former chief of staff to Vice President Dick Cheney, told a grand jury that his superiors authorized him to disclose to reporters information from the U.S. National Intelligence Estimate.
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Original:  In a letter by special prosecutor Patrick J. Fitzgerald, written in January and included papers filed in court by Libby’s defense team on Monday , it is unclear whether “superiors” was meant by Fitzgerald to mean that Libby referred to  his immediate boss, the V.P. Cheney.
Revised:  In a letter by special prosecutor Patrick J. Fitzgerald, written in January and included papers filed in court by Libby’s defense team on Monday . Although this letter did not say which “superiors” was meant by Fitzgerald to mean that Libby referred to his immediate boss, the V.P. Cheney.
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Original:  In a letter by special prosecutor Patrick J. Fitzgerald, written in January and included papers filed in court by Libby’s defense team on Monday , it is unclear whether “superiors” was meant by Fitzgerald to mean that Libby referred to  his immediate boss, the V.P. Cheney.
Revised:  In a letter by special prosecutor Patrick J. Fitzgerald, written in January and included papers filed in court by Libby’s defense team on Monday , it is unclear whether “superiors” Libby referred to his immediate boss, the V.P. Cheney.
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Original:  In a letter by special prosecutor Patrick J. Fitzgerald, written in January and included papers filed in court by Libby’s defense team on Monday , it is unclear whether “superiors” was meant by Fitzgerald to mean that Libby referred to  his immediate boss, the V.P. Cheney.
Revised:  In a letter by special prosecutor Patrick J. Fitzgerald, written in January and included papers filed in court by Libby’s defense team on Monday , it is unclear whether “superiors” was meant by Fitzgerald to mean that Libby referred to his immediate boss, V.P. Cheney.
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Original:  If so , it could broaden the scandal.
Revised:  If this is confirmed , it could broaden the scandal.
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Original:  It is also unclear whether the information leaked involved intelligence that was still classified.
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