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Original:  Performancece appraisals are most often conducted by an immediate manager, such as line managers or front-line managers   Annual performance reviews have been criticized   as providing feedback too infrequently to be useful, and argue performance reviews in general do more harm than good.
Revised:  Performance appraisals are most often conducted by an immediate manager, such as line managers or front-line managers Annual performance reviews have been criticized as providing feedback too infrequently to be useful, and argue performance reviews in general do more harm than good.
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Original:  Performancece appraisals are most often conducted by an immediate manager, such as line managers or front-line managers   Annual performance reviews have been criticized   as providing feedback too infrequently to be useful, and argue performance reviews in general do more harm than good.
Revised:  Performancece appraisals are most often conducted by an immediate manager, such as line managers or front-line managers ) Annual performance reviews have been criticized as providing feedback too infrequently to be useful, and argue performance reviews in general do more harm than good.
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Original: The RAFOS float 450px|Sound wave correlation The global idea To use a RAFOS float, one has to submerge it in the specified location, so that it will get carried by the current.
Revised:  RAFOS float 450px|Sound wave correlation The global idea To use a RAFOS float, one has to submerge it in the specified location, so that it will get carried by the current.
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Original: The RAFOS float 450px|Sound wave correlation The global idea To use a RAFOS float, one has to submerge it in the specified location, so that it will get carried by the current.
Revised: The RAFOS float 450px|Sound wave correlation Global idea To use a RAFOS float, one has to submerge it in the specified location, so that it will get carried by the current.
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Original:  Then, every so often (usually every 6 or 8 hours) a 80 seconds sound signal is sent from moored emitters.
Revised:  Then, every so often (usually every 6 or 8 hours) an 80-second sound signal is sent from moored emitters.
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Original:  Using the fact that a signal transmitted in the ocean preserves its phase structure (or pattern) for several minutes, it has been thought to use signals in which the frequency increases linearly of 1.523 Hz from start to end centered around 250 Hz  The sound source project .
Revised:  Using the fact that a signal transmitted in the ocean preserves its phase structure (or pattern) for several minutes, it has been thought to use signals in which the frequency increases linearly of 1.523 Hz from start to end centered around 250 Hz . The sound source project .
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Original:  Using the fact that a signal transmitted in the ocean preserves its phase structure (or pattern) for several minutes, it has been thought to use signals in which the frequency increases linearly of 1.523 Hz from start to end centered around 250 Hz  The sound source project .
Revised:  Using the fact that a signal transmitted in the ocean preserves its phase structure (or pattern) for several minutes, it has been thought to use signals in which the frequency increases linearly of 1.523 Hz from start to end centered around 250 Hz The sound source project 
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Original:  Then receivers would listen for specific phase structures, by comparing the incoming data with a reference 80 second signal.
Revised:  Then receivers would listen for specific phase structures, by comparing the incoming data with a reference 80-second signal.
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Original:  From the arrival time of the signals from two or more sound sources, and the previous location of the float, it's current location can easily be determined to considerable (<1 km) accuracy.
Revised:  From the arrival time of the signals from two or more sound sources, and the previous location of the float, its current location can easily be determined to considerable (<1 km) accuracy.
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Original:  For instance, the float will listen for three sources and store the time of arrival for the 2 largest signals heard from each source.
Revised:  For instance, the float will listen for three sources and store the time of arrival for the two largest signals heard from each source.
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Original:  Electrical characteristics The electronics can be divided into four categories: an satellite transmitter used after surfacing, the set of sensors, a time reference clock, and a microprocessor.
Revised:  Electrical characteristics The electronics can be divided into four categories: a satellite transmitter used after surfacing, the set of sensors, a time reference clock, and a microprocessor.
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Original:  It usually takes 3 days for the satellite to collect all the dataset. x300px|An isopycnal ballast spring The isobaric model An isobaric float aims to follow a constant pressure plane, by adjusting the ballast's weight to attain buoyancy to a certain depth.
Revised:  It usually takes three days for the satellite to collect all the dataset. x300px|An isopycnal ballast spring The isobaric model An isobaric float aims to follow a constant pressure plane, by adjusting the ballast's weight to attain buoyancy to a certain depth.
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Original:  To achieve an isobaric float, it's compressibility must be much lower than that of seawater.
Revised:  To achieve an isobaric float, its compressibility must be much lower than that of seawater.
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Original:  It is to be noted that an error of about 10\% in the setting can lead to a 50m depth difference once in water.
Revised:  It is to be noted that an error of about 10\% in the setting can lead to a 50 m depth difference once in water.
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Original:  This is why floats are ballasted in tanks working at high pressure Isopycnal floats.
Revised:  This is why floats are ballasted in tanks working at high pressure . Isopycnal floats
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Original:  It derives from SOFAR floats,  The evolution of the Swallow float to today's RAFOS float , which emitted from the ocean to moored receivers, but instead receives the signals from the moored devices, thus allowing a much lower fabrication cost.
Revised:  It derives from SOFAR floats, , The evolution of the Swallow float to today's RAFOS float , which emitted from the ocean to moored receivers, but instead receives the signals from the moored devices, thus allowing a much lower fabrication cost.
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Original:  It derives from SOFAR floats,  The evolution of the Swallow float to today's RAFOS float , which emitted from the ocean to moored receivers, but instead receives the signals from the moored devices, thus allowing a much lower fabrication cost.
Revised:  It derives from SOFAR floats, The evolution of the Swallow float to today's RAFOS float which emitted from the ocean to moored receivers, but instead receives the signals from the moored devices, thus allowing a much lower fabrication cost.
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Original:  Then, because the speed of sound is known to 0.3\% in sea, the position of the float can be determined to about 1km by an iterative circular tracking procedureSpain , Diane L., 1980: SOFAR float data report of the POLYMODE Local Dynamics Experiment.
Revised:  Then, because the speed of sound is known to 0.3\% in sea, the position of the float can be determined to about 1 km by an iterative circular tracking procedureSpain , Diane L., 1980: SOFAR float data report of the POLYMODE Local Dynamics Experiment.
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Original:  Then, because the speed of sound is known to 0.3\% in sea, the position of the float can be determined to about 1km by an iterative circular tracking procedureSpain , Diane L., 1980: SOFAR float data report of the POLYMODE Local Dynamics Experiment.
Revised:  Then, because the speed of sound is known to 0.3\% in sea, the position of the float can be determined to about 1km by an iterative circular tracking procedure.Spain , Diane L., 1980: SOFAR float data report of the POLYMODE Local Dynamics Experiment.
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Original:  University of Rhode Island, Narragansett Marine Laboratory, 80-1, 197pp. . The doppler effect can also be taken into account.
Revised:  University of Rhode Island, Narragansett Marine Laboratory, 80-1, 197pp. The doppler effect can also be taken into account.
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Original:  Since the float's speed isn't known, a first closing speed is determined by measuring the shift in time arrival between two transmissions, where the float is considered not to have moved.
Revised:  Since the float's speed is not known, a first closing speed is determined by measuring the shift in time arrival between two transmissions, where the float is considered not to have moved.
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Original:  Many results have been achieved thanks to these floats, on the global mapping of the ocean characteristics, or for example how floats systematically shoal (upwell) as they approach anticyclonic meanders and deepen (downwell) as they approach cyclonic meandersParticle pathways in the Gulf Stream , T. Rossby A.S.Bower P-T Shaw, Bulletin American Meteorological Society, vol 66,n 9. On the left is a typical set of data from a RAFOS float.
Revised:  Many results have been achieved thanks to these floats, on the global mapping of the ocean characteristics, or for example how floats systematically shoal (upwell) as they approach anticyclonic meanders and deepen (downwell) as they approach cyclonic meanders.Particle pathways in the Gulf Stream , T. Rossby A.S.Bower P-T Shaw, Bulletin American Meteorological Society, vol 66,n 9. On the left is a typical set of data from a RAFOS float.
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Original:  Many results have been achieved thanks to these floats, on the global mapping of the ocean characteristics, or for example how floats systematically shoal (upwell) as they approach anticyclonic meanders and deepen (downwell) as they approach cyclonic meandersParticle pathways in the Gulf Stream , T. Rossby A.S.Bower P-T Shaw, Bulletin American Meteorological Society, vol 66,n 9. On the left is a typical set of data from a RAFOS float.
Revised:  Many results have been achieved thanks to these floats, on the global mapping of the ocean characteristics, or for example how floats systematically shoal (upwell) as they approach anticyclonic meanders and deepen (downwell) as they approach cyclonic meandersParticle pathways in the Gulf Stream , T. Rossby A.S.Bower P-T Shaw, Bulletin American Meteorological Society, vol 66,n 9 On the left is a typical set of data from a RAFOS float.
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Original:  See also URL URL URL URL External links RAFOS Float - Ocean Instruments URL URL URL URL URL Category:Oceanography
Revised:  See also URL URL URL URL External links RAFOS Float - Ocean Instruments URL URL URL URL URL 
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Original:  450px|Map of the Argo float network as of September 2009 The Argo project The Argo URL is an international collaboration between 50 research and operational agencies from 26 countries that aims to measure a global array of temperature,salinity and pressure of the top 2000m of the ocean.
Revised:  The Argo project The Argo URL is an international collaboration between 50 research and operational agencies from 26 countries that aims to measure a global array of temperature,salinity and pressure of the top 2000m of the ocean.
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Original: A RAFOS floatThe RAFOS  system, T. Rossby D. Dorson J. Fontaine, Journal of atmospheric and oceanic technology, v.3 p.672-680 is a submersible device used to map ocean currents in a Lagrangian way.
Revised:  RAFOS system, T. Rossby D. Dorson J. Fontaine, Journal of atmospheric and oceanic technology, v.3 p.672-680 is a submersible device used to map ocean currents in a Lagrangian way.
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Original: A RAFOS floatThe RAFOS  system, T. Rossby D. Dorson J. Fontaine, Journal of atmospheric and oceanic technology, v.3 p.672-680 is a submersible device used to map ocean currents in a Lagrangian way.
Revised: A RAFOS floatThe RAFOS floatsThe RAFOS system, T. Rossby D. Dorson J. Fontaine, Journal of atmospheric and oceanic technology, v.3 p.672-680 is a submersible device used to map ocean currents in a Lagrangian way.
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Original: A RAFOS floatThe RAFOS  system, T. Rossby D. Dorson J. Fontaine, Journal of atmospheric and oceanic technology, v.3 p.672-680 is a submersible device used to map ocean currents in a Lagrangian way.
Revised: A RAFOS floatThe RAFOS system, T. Rossby D. Dorson J. Fontaine, Journal of atmospheric and oceanic technology, v.3 p.672-680 are submersible devices used to map ocean currents in a Lagrangian way.
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Original: RAFOS floatsThe RAFOS system, T. Rossby D. Dorson J. Fontaine, Journal of atmospheric and oceanic technology, v.3 p.672 -680 are submersible devices used to map ocean currents well below the surface.
Revised: RAFOS floatsThe RAFOS system, T. Rossby D. Dorson J. Fontaine, Journal of atmospheric and oceanic technology, v.3 p.672 –680 are submersible devices used to map ocean currents well below the surface.
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Original:  Listening for sound requires far less energy than transmitting it, so RAFOS floats are cheaper and longer lasting than their predecessors, but they do not provide information in real-time: instead they store it onboard , and upon completing their mission, drop a weight, rise to the surface, and transmit the data to shore by satellite.
Revised:  Listening for sound requires far less energy than transmitting it, so RAFOS floats are cheaper and longer lasting than their predecessors, but they do not provide information in real-time: instead they store it on board , and upon completing their mission, drop a weight, rise to the surface, and transmit the data to shore by satellite.
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Original:  Of the importance of measuring Ocean Currents The underwater world is still mostly unknown.
Revised:  Of the importance of measuring ocean currents The underwater world is still mostly unknown.
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Original:  This permits to get rid of any noise appearing during the travel of the wave by floating particles or fishes.
Revised:  This permits to get rid of any noise appearing during the travel of the wave by floating particles or fish.
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Original:  See also SOFAR channel Oceans Ocean acoustic tomography Argo (oceanography) External links RAFOS Float - Ocean Instruments URL URL URL URL URL
Revised:  See also Argo (oceanography) SOFAR channel Ocean acoustic tomography Argo (oceanography) External links RAFOS Float - Ocean Instruments URL URL URL URL URL
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Original:  See also SOFAR channel Oceans Ocean acoustic tomography Argo (oceanography) External links RAFOS Float - Ocean Instruments URL URL URL URL URL
Revised:  See also SOFAR channel Oceans Ocean acoustic tomography External links RAFOS Float - Ocean Instruments URL URL URL URL URL
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Original:  See also SOFAR channel Oceans Ocean acoustic tomography Argo (oceanography) External links RAFOS Float - Ocean Instruments URL URL URL URL URL
Revised:  See also SOFAR channel Oceans Ocean acoustic tomography Argo (oceanography) External links RAFOS Float – Ocean Instruments URL URL URL URL URL
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Original:  It is to be noted that an error of about 10\% in the setting can lead to a 50 m depth difference once in water.
Revised:  An error of about 10\% in the setting can lead to a 50 m depth difference once in water.
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Original: The Argo project The Argo URL is an international collaboration between 50 research and operational agencies from 26 countries that aims to measure a global array of temperature,salinity and pressure of the top 2000m of the ocean.
Revised: The Argo project The Argo project is an international collaboration between 50 research and operational agencies from 26 countries that aims to measure a global array of temperature,salinity and pressure of the top 2000m of the ocean.
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Original:  The Manipuri won the Durand Cup with the Mumbai-based outfit but also tore his ligament there in a Mumbai League match.
Revised:  He won the Durand Cup with the Mumbai-based outfit but also tore his ligament there in a Mumbai League match.
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Original: India international footballers Category:1983 births Category:Living people Category: Meithei people Category:Footballers from Manipur Category:People from Imphal Category:2011 AFC Asian Cup players Category:I-League players Category:Mahindra United FC players Category:Mumbai Tigers F.C. players Category:East Bengal F.C. players Category:Mohun Bagan A.C. players Category:United Sikkim F.C. players Category:Association football fullbacks Category:Footballers at the 2006 Asian Gam
Revised: India international footballers Category:1983 births Category:Living people Category: Meitei people Category:Footballers from Manipur Category:People from Imphal Category:2011 AFC Asian Cup players Category:I-League players Category:Mahindra United FC players Category:Mumbai Tigers F.C. players Category:East Bengal F.C. players Category:Mohun Bagan A.C. players Category:United Sikkim F.C. players Category:Association football fullbacks Category:Footballers at the 2006 Asian Gam
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Original:  In 2014 , he has joined United Sikkim F.C.
Revised:  In 2014 he has joined United Sikkim F.C.
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Original: Mumbai Tigers In the 2013 I-League 2nd Division, he had opened the scoring for the Mumbai Tigers F.C. in their last match against Bhawanipore F.C. in the 3-5 URL He won the Kolkata League with Mohun Bagan in his first season and will be an important player for them once he returns from international duty.
Revised: Mumbai Tigers In the 2013 I-League 2nd Division, he had opened the scoring for the Mumbai Tigers F.C. in their last match against Bhawanipore F.C. in the 3-5 loss. He won the Kolkata League with Mohun Bagan in his first season and will be an important player for them once he returns from international duty.
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Original:  He has four international goals to his name with the most recent one coming in the 3-6 defeat against Yemen in Pune. URL
Revised:  He has four international goals to his name with the most recent one coming in the 3-6 defeat against Yemen in Pune. 
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Original: Irungbam Surkumar Singh (born 21 March 1983) is an Indian footballer who played for India national football team . passed out of the prestigious Tata Football Academy in 2000 and was signed on by East Bengal FC and now he plays for United Sikkim F.C. in the 2nd Division of the I-League.
Revised: Irungbam Surkumar Singh (born 21 March 1983) is an Indian footballer who played for India national football team graduated out of the prestigious Tata Football Academy in 2000 and was signed on by East Bengal FC and now he plays for United Sikkim F.C. in the 2nd Division of the I-League.
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Original:  The company sized Pakistani unit fought against a brigade of Indian soldiers and Mukti Bahini .
Revised:  The company-sized Pakistani unit fought against a brigade of Indian soldiers and Mukti Bahini .
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Original:  These were mounted by Mukti Bahini, mainly former members of East Pakistan's regular forces, but failed to make any impression .
Revised:  These were mounted by Mukti Bahini, mainly former members of East Pakistan's regular forces, but failed to make any damage .
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Original:  Further attacks on Kamalpur, a kilometre from the border, came on 22 October and 14 November, the latter being made by the Indian Army's 13th Battalion, Brigade of the Guards (of Kler's brigade), which established blocking positions to the south.
Revised:  Further attacks on Kamalpur, a kilometre from the border, continued on 22 October and 14 November, the latter being made by the Indian Army's 13th Battalion, Brigade of the Guards (of Kler's brigade), which established blocking positions to the south.
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Original:  Further attacks on Kamalpur, a kilometre from the border, came on 22 October and 14 November, the latter being made by the Indian Army's 13th Battalion, Brigade of the Guards (of Kler's brigade), which established blocking positions to the south.
Revised:  Further attacks on Kamalpur, a kilometre from the border, came on 22 October and 14 November, the latter being carried out by the Indian Army's 13th Battalion, Brigade of the Guards (of Kler's brigade), which established blocking positions to the south.
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Original:   Kler tried to take Kamalpur on the run, using Mukti Bahini troops, and failed.
Revised:  Kler tried to take Kamalpur on the run, using Mukti Bahini troops, but failed. Later,
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Original:  Kler made two unsuccessful attempts to overrun the Pakistani troops positions in Kamalpur  .
Revised:  Kler made two more attempts to overrun the Pakistani troops positions in Kamalpur .
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Original:  Kler made two unsuccessful attempts to overrun the Pakistani troops positions in Kamalpur  .
Revised:  Kler made two unsuccessful attempts to overrun the Pakistani troops positions in Kamalpur , but likewise unsuccessfully .
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Original:  Failure of  third attack and resultant casualties had dispirited the attacking troops, and the higher command had developed second thought about Kler ability to handle live operations.
Revised:  Failure of the third attack and resultant casualties had dispirited the attacking troops, and the higher command had developed second thought about Kler ability to handle live operations.
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Original:  Failure of  third attack and resultant casualties had dispirited the attacking troops, and the higher command had developed second thought about Kler ability to handle live operations.
Revised:  Failure of third attack and resulting casualties had dispirited the attacking troops, and the higher command had developed second thought about Kler ability to handle live operations.
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Original:  Malik a note via a Mukti Bahini courier: "whatever you decide to do  we have every intention of eliminating Kamalpur post.
Revised:  Malik a note via a Mukti Bahini courier: "whatever you decide to do , we have every intention of eliminating Kamalpur post.
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Original:  Sukhwant Singh stated, 'He  had put up a courageous stand ... and surrendered after holding a brigade of besiegers for 21 days ...
Revised:  Outcome had put up a courageous stand ... and surrendered after holding a brigade of besiegers for 21 days ...
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Original: The defence of Kamalpur was a battle fought at Kamalpur near the border between India and East Pakistan (now Bangladesh) in the Bangladesh Liberation War.
Revised: The defence of Kamalpur was a battle fought at Kamalpur near the border between India and East Pakistan (now Bangladesh) during the Bangladesh Liberation War.
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Original:  From: Capt Retd ALi Muhammad Bangash, ex engineer officer, 31 Baloch, Jamalpur Cantt.
Revised:  From: Capt Retd Ali Muhammad Bangash, ex engineer officer, 31 Baloch, Jamalpur Cantt.
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Original:  He then decided to mount an attack by the 1st Battalion, Maratha Light Infantry on the forty men and four 120mm mortars of 83 Mortar Battery belonging to Pakistan Army.
Revised:  He then decided to mount an attack by the 1st Battalion, Maratha Light Infantry on the forty men and four 120 mm mortars of 83 Mortar Battery belonging to Pakistan Army.
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Original: The ICH guidelines on Good clinical practice (GCP) use the term ‘ Case report form’ or ‘CRF’ to refer to these systems 1 . No matter what CRF is utilized, the quality and integrity of the data is of primary importance .
Revised: The ICH guidelines on good clinical practice (GCP) use the term ‘ Case report form’ or ‘CRF’ to refer to these systems 1 . No matter what CRF is utilized, the quality and integrity of the data is of primary importance .
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