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Original:  His popularity lasted until after the Wall Street Crash of 1929, the effects of which began to be felt in Chile at the end of 1930, leading to an abrupt fall in the prices of saltpeter and copper, upon which the Chilean economy was strongly dependent.
Revised:  His popularity lasted until after the Wall Street Crash of 1929, the effects of which began to be felt in Chile at the end of 1930, leading to an abrupt fall in the prices of saltpeter and copper, on which the Chilean economy was strongly dependent.
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Original:  Without an influx of foreign currency , Chile was heavily affected by the Great Depression.
Revised:  With no influx of foreign currency , Chile was heavily affected by the Great Depression.
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Original:  Although Ibáñez's government increased export taxes to 71\% and established restrictions on exit of devises, he did not manage to restore equilibrium to the balance of trade, leading to a depletion of the gold reserves.
Revised:  Although Ibáñez's government increased export taxes to 71\% and imposed restrictions on exit of devises, he did not manage to restore equilibrium to the balance of trade, leading to a depletion of the gold reserves.
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Original:  Although Ibáñez's government increased export taxes to 71\% and established restrictions on exit of devises, he did not manage to restore equilibrium to the balance of trade, leading to a depletion of the gold reserves.
Revised:  Although Ibáñez's government increased export taxes to 71\% and established restrictions on exit of devises, he did not the balance of trade, leading to a depletion of the gold reserves.
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Original:  Although Ibáñez's government increased export taxes to 71\% and established restrictions on exit of devises, he did not manage to restore equilibrium to the balance of trade, leading to a depletion of the gold reserves.
Revised:  Although Ibáñez's government increased export taxes to 71\% and established restrictions on exit of devises, he did not manage to restore equilibrium to the balance of trade, leading to a depletion of Chile’s gold reserves.
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Original:  On July 13, 1931, he named a "Cabinet of National Salvation" (Gabinete de Salvación Nacional) including Pedro Blanquier and Juan Esteban Montero.
Revised:  On July 13, 1931, he named a "Cabinet of National Salvation" (Gabinete de Salvación Nacional) whose members included Pedro Blanquier and Juan Esteban Montero.
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Original:  The combination would be lethal, as when Blanquier, on one hand, revealed the catastrophic state of the finances , Monterowas relaxing press censorship , leading to an immediate popular reaction to the revelations .
Revised:  Ibáñez’s popularity dropped further as Blanquier’s revelations on the state of Chile’s finances were disseminated widely by Montero’s relaxed censorship of the press .
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Original:  Ibáñez's lavish public spending did nothing to alleviate the situation , and his opponents, primarily the exiled Grove and Alessandri, began to plan a comeback.
Revised:  Ibáñez's lavish public spending did not alleviate the situation , and his opponents, primarily the exiled Grove and Alessandri, began to plan a comeback.
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Original:  Ibáñez's lavish public spending did nothing to alleviate the situation , and his opponents, primarily the exiled Grove and Alessandri, began to plan a comeback.
Revised:  Ibáñez's lavish public spending did nothing to alleviate the situation ; his opponents, primarily the exiled Grove and Alessandri, began to plan a comeback.
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Original:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove him from power, one by Alessandri, Marmaduque Grove and two other people (which led to their exile to Easter Island), and another in September 1930 in Concepción . A great wave of public unrest followed, during which students of the University of Chile and of the Pontifical Catholic University of Chile initiated demonstrations, soon joined by physicians and lawyers.
Revised:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove Ibáñez from power . A great wave of public unrest followed, during which students of the University of Chile and of the Pontifical Catholic University of Chile initiated demonstrations, soon joined by physicians and lawyers.
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Original:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove him from power, one by Alessandri, Marmaduque Grove and two other people (which led to their exile to Easter Island), and another in September 1930 in Concepción . A great wave of public unrest followed, during which students of the University of Chile and of the Pontifical Catholic University of Chile initiated demonstrations, soon joined by physicians and lawyers.
Revised:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove him from power, one by Alessandri, Marmaduque Grove and two other people (which led to their exile to Easter Island), and another in September 1930 in Concepción . Pubic unrest followed, during which students of the University of Chile and of the Pontifical Catholic University of Chile initiated demonstrations, soon joined by physicians and lawyers.
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Original:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove him from power, one by Alessandri, Marmaduque Grove and two other people (which led to their exile to Easter Island), and another in September 1930 in Concepción . A great wave of public unrest followed, during which students of the University of Chile and of the Pontifical Catholic University of Chile initiated demonstrations, soon joined by physicians and lawyers.
Revised:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove him from power, one by Alessandri, Marmaduque Grove and two other people (which led to their exile to Easter Island), and another in September 1930 in Concepción . A great wave of public unrest followed, during which students from the University of Chile and of the Pontifical Catholic University of Chile initiated demonstrations, soon joined by physicians and lawyers.
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Original:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove him from power, one by Alessandri, Marmaduque Grove and two other people (which led to their exile to Easter Island), and another in September 1930 in Concepción . A great wave of public unrest followed, during which students of the University of Chile and of the Pontifical Catholic University of Chile initiated demonstrations, soon joined by physicians and lawyers.
Revised:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove him from power, one by Alessandri, Marmaduque Grove and two other people (which led to their exile to Easter Island), and another in September 1930 in Concepción . A great wave of public unrest followed, during which students of the University of Chile and Pontifical Catholic University of Chile initiated demonstrations, soon joined by physicians and lawyers.
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Original:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove him from power, one by Alessandri, Marmaduque Grove and two other people (which led to their exile to Easter Island), and another in September 1930 in Concepción . A great wave of public unrest followed, during which students of the University of Chile and of the Pontifical Catholic University of Chile initiated demonstrations, soon joined by physicians and lawyers.
Revised:  Several conspiracies attempted to remove him from power, one by Alessandri, Marmaduque Grove and two other people (which led to their exile to Easter Island), and another in September 1930 in Concepción . A great wave of public unrest followed, during which students of the University of Chile and of the Pontifical Catholic University of Chile protested, later joined by physicians and lawyers.
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Original:  The police forces killed more than ten people, leading to Ibáñez's resignation on July 26, 1931, and his subsequent exile on the following day.
Revised:  The police forces killed more than ten people, resulting in Ibáñez's resignation on July 26, 1931, and his subsequent exile on the following day.
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Original:  The police forces killed more than ten people, leading to Ibáñez's resignation on July 26, 1931, and his subsequent exile on the following day.
Revised:  The police forces killed more than ten people, leading to Ibáñez's resignation on July 26, 1931, followed by his exile the next day.
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Original:  Before leaving, Ibáñez delegated his office to the president of the senate, Pedro Opazo , who in turn resigned in favor of Interior Minister Juan Esteban Montero, a member of the Radical Party, who was proclaimed the new president by Congress.
Revised:  Before leaving, Ibáñez designated Pedro Opazo as his successor; he, in turn , who in turn resigned in favor of Interior Minister Juan Esteban Montero, a member of the Radical Party, who was proclaimed the new president by Congress.
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Original:  Before leaving, Ibáñez delegated his office to the president of the senate, Pedro Opazo , who in turn resigned in favor of Interior Minister Juan Esteban Montero, a member of the Radical Party, who was proclaimed the new president by Congress.
Revised:  Before leaving, Ibáñez delegated his office to the president of the senate, Pedro Opazo , resigned in favor of Interior Minister Juan Esteban Montero, a member of the Radical Party, who was proclaimed the new president by Congress.
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Original:  Freedom of press was restricted, 200 politicians were arrested or exiled (among whom  Alessandri and his former ally Marmaduque Grove), the Communist Party was proscribed, and the workers' movement strongly repressed.
Revised:  Freedom of press was restricted, 200 politicians were arrested or exiled (among whom were Alessandri and his former ally Marmaduque Grove), the Communist Party was proscribed, and the workers' movement strongly repressed.
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Original:  Freedom of press was restricted, 200 politicians were arrested or exiled (among whom  Alessandri and his former ally Marmaduque Grove), the Communist Party was proscribed, and the workers' movement strongly repressed.
Revised:  Freedom of press was restricted, 200 politicians were arrested or exiled (among whom Alessandri and his former ally Marmaduque Grove), the Communist Party was proscribed, and the workers' movement repressed.
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Original:  However, according to anonymous sources Hamza bin Laden and other Al Qaeda leaders sought refuge in Iran after the 9/11 attacks.
Revised:  However, Hamza bin Laden and other Al Qaeda leaders sought refuge in Iran after the 9/11 attacks.
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Original:  According to Saudi state media Al Arabiya, Bin Laden married a daughter of Abdullah Ahmed Abdullah when he was 17 years old.
Revised:  Bin Laden married a daughter of Abdullah Ahmed Abdullah when he was 17 years old.
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Original:  According to anonymous sources Maryam, Hamza bin Laden's widow and the daughter of the Egyptian high-ranking member of al-Qaeda and its bombmaker Abdullah Ahmed Abdullah (nom de guerre Abu Muhammed al-Masri), was killed in August 2020 in Tehran, Iran alongside her father .
Revised:  Maryam, Hamza bin Laden's widow and the daughter of the Egyptian high-ranking member of al-Qaeda and its bombmaker Abdullah Ahmed Abdullah (nom de guerre Abu Muhammed al-Masri), was killed in August 2020 in Tehran, Iran alongside her father .
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Original: Hamza bin Osama bin Mohammed bin 'Awad bin Laden  (;
Revised: Hamza bin Osama bin Mohammed bin 'Awad bin Laden still alive (;
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Original:  his brother Jannie was a later addition to the squad, replacing B. J. Botha, who injured a knee in South Africa's final pool match against the USA.
Revised:  his brother Jannie was a later addition to the squad, replacing BJ Botha, who injured a knee in South Africa's final pool match against the USA.
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Original: South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African rugby union players Category:South Africa international rugby union players Category:Rugby union hookers Category:Alumni of Grey College, Bloemfontein Category:Sharks (Currie Cup) players Category:Sharks (rugby union) players Category:White South African people Category:Free State Cheetahs players Category:South African expatriates in France Category:Expatriate rugby union players in France Category:Montpellier Hérault Rugby  playe
Revised: South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African rugby union players Category:South Africa international rugby union players Category:Rugby union hookers Category:Alumni of Grey College, Bloemfontein Category:Sharks (Currie Cup) players Category:Sharks (rugby union) players Category:White South African people Category:Free State Cheetahs players Category:South African expatriates in France Category:Expatriate rugby union players in France Category:Montpellier Hérault Rugby players Category:Bulls (rugby union) playe
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Original:  Liberal Party of Canada MPs Category:Living people Category: Members of the Legislative Assembly of the Northwest Territories Category:Métis politicians Category: Members of the House of Commons of Canada from the Northwest Territories Category:Indigenous Members of the House of Commons of Canada Category:  Mayors of places in the Northwest Territories Category:Members of the Executive Council of the Northwest Territories Category: 21st-century Canadian politicians Category: Dene peop
Revised:  Liberal Party of Canada MPs Category:Living people Category: Members of the Legislative Assembly of the Northwest Territories Category:Métis politicians Category: Members of the House of Commons of Canada Category: Mayors of places in the Northwest Territories Category:Members of the Executive Council of the Northwest Territories Category: 21st-century Canadian politicians Category: Dene peop
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Original:  Liberal Party of Canada MPs Category:Living people Category: Members of the Legislative Assembly of the Northwest Territories Category:Métis politicians Category: Members of the House of Commons of Canada from the Northwest Territories Category:Indigenous Members of the House of Commons of Canada Category:  Mayors of places in the Northwest Territories Category:Members of the Executive Council of the Northwest Territories Category: 21st-century Canadian politicians Category: Dene peop
Revised:  Liberal Party of Canada MPs Category:Living people Category: Members of the Legislative Assembly of the Northwest Territories Category:Métis politicians Category: Members of the House of Commons of Canada from the Northwest Territories Category:Indigenous Members of the House of Commons of Canada Category: Liberal Party of Canada MPs Category:Living people Category: Mayors of places in the Northwest Territories Category:Members of the Executive Council of the Northwest Territories Category: 21st-century Canadian politicians Category: Dene peop
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Original:  Liberal Party of Canada MPs Category:Living people Category: Members of the Legislative Assembly of the Northwest Territories Category:Métis politicians Category: Members of the House of Commons of Canada from the Northwest Territories Category:Indigenous Members of the House of Commons of Canada Category:  Mayors of places in the Northwest Territories Category:Members of the Executive Council of the Northwest Territories Category: 21st-century Canadian politicians Category: Dene peop
Revised:  Liberal Party of Canada MPs Category:Living people Category: Members of the Legislative Assembly of the Northwest Territories Category:Métis politicians Category: Members of the House of Commons of Canada from the Northwest Territories Category:Indigenous Members of the House of Commons of Canada Category: Mayors of places in the Northwest Territories Category:Members of the Executive Council of the Northwest Territories Category: Members of the Legislative Assembly of the Northwest Territories Category:Métis politicians Category: Dene peop
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Original:  Liberal Party of Canada MPs Category:Living people Category: Members of the Legislative Assembly of the Northwest Territories Category:Métis politicians Category: Members of the House of Commons of Canada from the Northwest Territories Category:Indigenous Members of the House of Commons of Canada Category:  Mayors of places in the Northwest Territories Category:Members of the Executive Council of the Northwest Territories Category: 21st-century Canadian politicians Category: Dene peop
Revised:  Liberal Party of Canada MPs Category:Living people Category: Members of the Legislative Assembly of the Northwest Territories Category:Métis politicians Category: Members of the House of Commons of Canada from the Northwest Territories Category:Indigenous Members of the House of Commons of Canada Category: Mayors of places in the Northwest Territories Category:Members of the Executive Council of the Northwest Territories Category: 21st-century Canadian politicians Category: Members of the House of Commons of Canada from the Northwest Territori
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Original:  He was first elected in the 2015 Canadian federal election, unseating Dennis Bevington, who was the former New Democratic Party MP for the riding.
Revised:  He was first elected in the 2015 Canadian federal election, unseating Dennis Bevington, who was the incumbent New Democratic Party MP for the riding.
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Original: Michael McLeod (born September 6, 1959) is a Canadian politician, currently serving as a Member of Parliament representing the Northwest Territories.
Revised: Michael McLeod (born September 6, 1959) is a Canadian politician, currently serving as a member of Parliament representing the Northwest Territories.
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Original: Michael McLeod (born September 6, 1959) is a Canadian politician, currently serving as a member of Parliament representing the Northwest Territories.
Revised: Michael McLeod (born September 6, 1959) is a Canadian politician, currently serving as a Member of Parliament representing the Northwest Territories.
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Original:  McLeod was re-elected in the 2019 Canadian federal election.
Revised:  McLeod was re-elected in the 2019 federal election.
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Original: The incised painting technique is to scratch a channel in the stone , and to then lay a thick paint or stucco plaster  across the surface.
Revised: Incised painting is a technique used to decorate stone surfaces. First, a channel is scratched in the stone , and to then lay a thick paint or stucco plaster across the surface.
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Original: The incised painting technique is to scratch a channel in the stone , and to then lay a thick paint or stucco plaster  across the surface.
Revised: The incised painting technique is to scratch a channel in the stone . Then, a thick paint or stucco plaster across the surface.
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Original: The incised painting technique is to scratch a channel in the stone , and to then lay a thick paint or stucco plaster  across the surface.
Revised: The incised painting technique is to scratch a channel in the stone , and to then lay a thick paint or stucco plaster is laid across the surface.
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Original:  The paint is then scraped off the surface of the stone, leaving paint in the incisio
Revised:  Last, the paint is then scraped off the surface of the stone, leaving paint in the incisio
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Original:  The paint is then scraped off the surface of the stone, leaving paint in the incisio
Revised:  The paint is then scraped off the surface of the stone, leaving paint in the incision. This technique was used in decorating the Taj Maha
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Original:  His father, a herbalist by profession, served in the Soviet Red Army and was wounded during World War II, but was deported to Kazakhstan as a result of the forced deportations of most Chechens to Central Asia in February 1944.
Revised:  His father, an herbalist by profession, served in the Soviet Red Army and was wounded during World War II, but was deported to Kazakhstan as a result of the forced deportations of most Chechens to Central Asia in February 1944.
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Original:  His father, an herbalist by profession, served in the Soviet Red Army and was wounded during World War II, but was deported to Kazakhstan as a result of the Population transfer in the Soviet Union| forced deportations of most  Chechens to Central Asia in February 1944.
Revised:  His father, an herbalist by profession, served in the Soviet Red Army and was wounded during World War II, but was deported to Kazakhstan as a result of the forced deportations of most Chechens to Central Asia in February 1944.
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Original: Khassan Baiev () (born 4 April 1963) is a Chechen-American surgeon who performed numerous operations under critical conditions during the Second Chechen War.
Revised: Khassan Baiev () (born 4 April 1963) is a Russian-American surgeon of Chechen origin who performed numerous operations under critical conditions during the Second Chechen War.
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Original: Khassan Zhunidovich Baiev () (born 4 April 1963) is a Russian-American surgeon of Chechen origin who performed numerous operations under critical conditions during the Second Chechen War.
Revised: Khassan Baiev () (born 4 April 1963) is a Russian-American surgeon of Chechen origin who performed numerous operations under critical conditions during the Second Chechen War.
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Original: The great Song Neo-Confucian Zhu Xi found the Mirror to be overly long for the average reader, as well as to too morally nihilist, and therefore prepared a didactic summary of it called the Zizhi Tongjian Gangmu (Digest of the Comprehensive Mirror to Aid in Government), posthumously published in 1219.
Revised: The great Song Neo-Confucian Zhu Xi found the Mirror to be overly long for the average reader, as well as too morally nihilist, and therefore prepared a didactic summary of it called the Zizhi Tongjian Gangmu (Digest of the Comprehensive Mirror to Aid in Government), posthumously published in 1219.
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Original:  Ancient Filipinos usually wrote documents on bamboo, bark, and leaves, which did not survive, unlike inscriptions on clay, metal, and ivoriy did, such as the Laguna Copperplate Inscription and Butuan Ivory Seal.
Revised:  Ancient Filipinos usually wrote documents on bamboo, bark, and leaves, which did not survive, unlike inscriptions on clay, metal, and ivory did, such as the Laguna Copperplate Inscription and Butuan Ivory Seal.
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Original: Historiographic and Conceptual Problems of North Africa and Sub-Saharan Africa Historiographic and Conceptual Problems%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The current major problem in African studies that Mohamed (2010/2012) identified is the inherited religious, Orientalist, colonial paradigm that European Africanists have preserved in present-day secularist, post-colonial, Anglophone African historiography.
Revised:  Historiographic and Conceptual Problems%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The current major problem in African studies that Mohamed (2010/2012) identified is the inherited religious, Orientalist, colonial paradigm that European Africanists have preserved in present-day secularist, post-colonial, Anglophone African historiography.
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Original: Historiographic and Conceptual Problems of North Africa and Sub-Saharan Africa Historiographic and Conceptual Problems%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The current major problem in African studies that Mohamed (2010/2012) identified is the inherited religious, Orientalist, colonial paradigm that European Africanists have preserved in present-day secularist, post-colonial, Anglophone African historiography.
Revised: Historiographic and Conceptual Problems of North Africa and Sub-Saharan Africa %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The current major problem in African studies that Mohamed (2010/2012) identified is the inherited religious, Orientalist, colonial paradigm that European Africanists have preserved in present-day secularist, post-colonial, Anglophone African historiography.
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