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Original:  Multiple health organizations recommend breast milk as the primary source of nutrition for babies, including the American Academy of Pediatrics (AAP) , the American Medical Association (AMA) , and the World Health Organization (WHO)
Revised:  Multiple health organizations recommend breast milk as the primary source of nutrition for babies, including the American Academy of Pediatrics (AAP) , the American Medical Association (AMA) , and the World Health Organization 
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Original:  Other Tongan names and phrases also emerged as a result of the battle including locations and names such as Tau'aki Pulu,  War Kava ceremony before sailing to Velata, Taufa'ahau tested Puakatau Vakauta by saying The Tu'i Tonga sent us a message saying "Tell the Kau Vaka'uta of 'Eua I have the (pupulu palangi) the white mans bullet awaiting them" - Tui Tonga.
Revised:  Other Tongan names and phrases also emerged as a result of the battle including locations and names such as Tau'aki Pulu, War Kava ceremony before sailing to Velata, Taufa'ahau tested Puakatau Vakauta with a statement, saying that The Tu'i Tonga sent us a message saying "Tell the Kau Vaka'uta of 'Eua I have the (pupulu palangi) the white mans bullet awaiting them" - Tui Tonga.
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Original:  Other Tongan names and phrases also emerged as a result of the battle including locations and names such as Tau'aki Pulu,  War Kava ceremony before sailing to Velata, Taufa'ahau tested Puakatau Vakauta by saying The Tu'i Tonga sent us a message saying "Tell the Kau Vaka'uta of 'Eua I have the (pupulu palangi) the white mans bullet awaiting them" - Tui Tonga.
Revised:  Other Tongan names and phrases also emerged as a result of the battle including locations and names such as Tau'aki Pulu, War Kava ceremony before sailing to Velata, Taufa'ahau tested Puakatau Vakauta by saying The Tu'i Tonga sent us a message "Tell the Kau Vaka'uta of 'Eua I have the (pupulu palangi) the white mans bullet awaiting them" - Tui Tonga.
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Original:  Puakatau Vakauta responsed "Tell the Tui Tonga that the same bullet he obtains is the same bullets I shall bring with me to Velata, and  in the dawn of day light we shall see who's bullets is the mightiest"
Revised:  Puakatau Vakauta responsed "Tell the Tui Tonga that the same bullet he obtains is the same bullets I 'm bringing with my warrior's to Velata, and in the dawn of day light we shall see who's bullets is the mightiest"
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Original:  Puakatau Vakauta responsed "Tell the Tui Tonga that the same bullet he obtains is the same bullets I shall bring with me to Velata, and  in the dawn of day light we shall see who's bullets is the mightiest"
Revised:  Puakatau Vakauta responsed "Tell the Tui Tonga that the same bullet he obtains is the same bullets I shall bring with me to Velata, and Let him know that in the dawn of day light we shall see who's bullets is the mightiest"
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Original:  Laufilitonga was remorseful and submissive as he felt the flll force of the fury of Puakatau Vakauta  .
Revised:  Laufilitonga was remorseful and submissive as he felt the firce force and the fury of Puakatau Vakauta .
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Original: The battle of Velata Tuku'aho held an tight relationship with the Kau Vaka'uta Title holder of 'Eua, and Tuku' ahoThe Father of Tupouto'a pass away in 1812, Tupouto'a The Father of Taufa'ahau (Tupou 'Uluaki) Tu'i Kanokupolu Dynasty  .
Revised: The battle of Velata Tuku'aho held an tight relationship with the Kau Vaka'uta Title holder of 'Eua, and Tuku' aho The Father of Tupouto'a pass away in 1812, Tupouto'a The Father of Taufa'ahau (Tupou 'Uluaki) Tu'i Kanokupolu Dynasty .
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Original:  The Notorious Battle Ground of Velata rang bells throughout Central Polynesia, and Ha'apai Island was know as "Lau Fele Tia " The land of many Warriors.
Revised:  The Notorious Battle Ground of Velata rang bells throughout Central Polynesia, and Ha'apai Island was know as "Lau Fele Toa " The land of many Warriors.
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Original:  Puakatau Vakauta responsed "Tell the Tui Tonga that the same bullet he obtains is the same bullets I'm bringing with my warrior's to Velata, and Let him know that in the dawn of day light we shall see who's bullets is the mightiest"
Revised:  Puakatau Vakauta responded "Tell the Tui Tonga that the same bullet he obtains is the same bullets I'm bringing with my warrior's to Velata, and Let him know that in the dawn of day light we shall see who's bullets is the mightiest"
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Original: The battle of Velata Tuku'aho held an tight relationship with the Kau Vaka'uta Title holder of 'Eua, and Tuku'aho The Father of Tupouto'a pass away in 1812, Tupouto'a The Father of Taufa'ahau (Tupou 'Uluaki) Tu'i Kanokupolu Dynasty and The First King of The Tongan Kingdom.
Revised: The battle of Velata Tuku'aho held a tight relationship with the Kau Vaka'uta Title holder of 'Eua, and Tuku'aho The Father of Tupouto'a pass away in 1812, Tupouto'a The Father of Taufa'ahau (Tupou 'Uluaki) Tu'i Kanokupolu Dynasty and The First King of The Tongan Kingdom.
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Original:  The Notorious Battle Ground of Velata rang bells throughout Central Polynesia, and Ha'apai Island was know as "Lau Fele Toa" The land of many Warriors.
Revised:  The Notorious Battle Ground of Velata rang bells throughout Central Polynesia, and Ha'apai Island was known as "Lau Fele Toa" The land of many Warriors.
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Original:  Other Tongan names and phrases also emerged as a result of the battle including locations and names such as Tau'aki Pulu  , There'sa Night Meeting (still practiced today by Tongan Rugby Team) or War Kava ceremony before sailing to Velata, Taufa'ahau tested Puakatau Vakauta with a statement, saying that The Tu'i Tonga sent us a message "Tell the Kau Vaka'uta of 'Eua I have the (pupulu palangi) the white mans bullet awaiting them" - Tui Tonga.
Revised:  Other Tongan names and phrases also emerged as a result of the battle including locations and names such as Tau'aki Pulu , or War Kava ceremony before sailing to Velata, Taufa'ahau tested Puakatau Vakauta with a statement, saying that The Tu'i Tonga sent us a message "Tell the Kau Vaka'uta of 'Eua I have the (pupulu palangi) the white mans bullet awaiting them" - Tui Tonga.
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Original: The battle of Velata Tuku'aho held a tight relationship with the Kau Vaka'uta Title holder of 'Eua, and Tuku'aho The Father of Tupouto'a pass away in 1812, Tupouto'a The Father of Taufa'ahau (Tupou 'Uluaki) Tu'i Kanokupolu Dynasty and The First King of The Tongan Kingdom.
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Original:  The Notorious Battle Ground of Velata rang bells throughout Central Polynesia, and Ha'apai Island was known as "Lau Fele Toa" The land of many Warriors.
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Original:   Edward W. Cox wrote a report of their visits to Fyne Court to see Crosse's work in the Taunton Courier in Autumn 1836. 
Revised:  Similarly dubious is a claim that Edward W. Cox wrote a report of their visits to Fyne Court to see Crosse's work in the Taunton Courier in Autumn 1836. 
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Original:  Similarly dubious is a claim that Edward W. Cox wrote a report of their visits to Fyne Court to see Crosse's work in the Taunton Courier in Autumn 1836. . Percy had been dead for  a dozen years by then.
Revised:  Similarly dubious is a claim that Edward W. Cox wrote a report of their visits to Fyne Court to see Crosse's work in the Taunton Courier in Autumn 1836. Percy had been dead for a dozen years by then.
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Original:  Similarly dubious is a claim that Edward W. Cox wrote a report of their visits to Fyne Court to see Crosse's work in the Taunton Courier in Autumn 1836. . Percy had been dead for  a dozen years by then.
Revised:  Similarly dubious is a claim that Edward W. Cox wrote a report of their visits to Fyne Court to see Crosse's work in the Taunton Courier in Autumn 1836. . Percy had been dead for over a dozen years by then.
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Original:  He became widely known after press reports of an electrocrystallization experiment he conducted in 1836, during which insects "appeared".
Revised:  He became known after press reports of an electrocrystallization experiment he conducted in 1836, during which insects "appeared".
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Original:  Around the age of 12  Crosse persuaded one of his teachers to let him attend a series of lectures on the natural sciences, the second of which was on the subject of electricity.
Revised:  Around the age of 12 , Crosse persuaded one of his teachers to let him attend a series of lectures on the natural sciences, the second of which was on the subject of electricity.
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Original:  This led to his lifelong interest in the subject.
Revised:  This was the cause of his lifelong interest in the subject.
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Original:  Around 1807 he started to experiment with electrocrystallization, forming crystalline lime carbonate from water taken from Holwell Cavern.
Revised:  Around 1807 , he began to experiment with electrocrystallization, forming crystalline lime carbonate from water taken from Holwell Cavern.
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Original:  He returned to the subject again from around 1817 and in subsequent years produced a total of 24 electrocrystallized minerals.
Revised:  He returned to the subject again from around 1817 and in subsequent years produced a total of 24 electrocrystallised minerals.
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Original:  In 1836  Sir Richard Phillips described seeing a wide variety of voltaic piles at Fyne Court, totalling 2,500, of which 1,500 were in use when he visited.
Revised:  In 1836 , Sir Richard Phillips described seeing a wide variety of voltaic piles at Fyne Court, totalling 2,500, of which 1,500 were in use when he visited.
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Original:  In 1836  Crosse was persuaded to attend a meeting of the British Association for the Advancement of Science in Bristol.
Revised:  In 1836 , Crosse was persuaded to attend a meeting of the British Association for the Advancement of Science in Bristol.
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Original:  Percy Bysshe Shelley and Mary Wollstonecraft Godwin reportedly attended a lecture by Crosse in London in December 1814, in which he allegedly explained his experiments with atmospheric electricity.
Revised:  Percy Bysshe Shelley and Mary Shelley reportedly attended a lecture by Crosse in London in December 1814, in which he allegedly explained his experiments with atmospheric electricity.
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Original:  The formation of the organisation both in India and Fiji occurred after the assassination of Swami Shraddhanand, a Hindu activist in India , by a Muslim .
Revised:  The formation of the organisation both in India and Fiji occurred after the assassination of Swami Shraddhanand, a Hindu activist in India .
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Original:  In a surprise move, the Federation of Labour (FOL) , which was supported by the majority of unions, backed the government.
Revised:  In a surprise move, the FOL , which was supported by the majority of unions, backed the government.
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Original:  The opposition Labour Party,  led by Walter Nash, attempted to take a moderate position in the dispute, with Nash saying that "we are not for the waterside workers, and we are not against them".
Revised:  The opposition Labour Party, now led by Walter Nash, attempted to take a moderate position in the dispute, with Nash saying that "we are not for the waterside workers, and we are not against them".
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Original:  Holland was seen as opportunistically using the strike to distract voters from the other issue of rapidly rising inflation which could have made the scheduled election in 1952 harder for him to win   .
Revised:  Holland was seen as opportunistically using the strike to distract voters from the other issue of rapidly rising inflation which could have made the scheduled election in 1952 harder for him to win . .
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Original:  During the strike, the Watersiders' Union ws deregistered and its funds and records were seized, and 26 local watersides ' unions were set up in its place.
Revised:  During the strike, the Watersiders' Union ws deregistered and its funds and records were seized, and 26 local watersiders ' unions were set up in its place.
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Original:  The waterfront inevitably became  point of conflict between workers and their unions on one side, and the employers and the state on the other.
Revised:  The waterfront inevitably became a point of conflict between workers and their unions on one side, and the employers and the state on the other.
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Original:  250px|Ships in Wellington harbour during the dispute The 1951 New Zealand waterfront dispute was the largest and most widespread industrial dispute in New Zealand history.
Revised:  250px|Ships in Wellington harbour during the disputeThe 1951 New Zealand waterfront dispute was the largest and most widespread industrial dispute in New Zealand history.
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Original: Don't Scab! 1951 Waterfront Dispute (12229830095)250px|Ships in Wellington harbour during the disputeThe 1951 New Zealand waterfront dispute was the largest and most widespread industrial dispute in New Zealand history.
Revised: Don't Scab! 1951 Waterfront Dispute (12229830095)250px|Ships in Wellington harbour during the dispute The 1951 New Zealand waterfront dispute was the largest and most widespread industrial dispute in New Zealand history.
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Original:  The dispute , sometimes referred to as the waterfront lockout or waterfront strike , lasted 151 days — from 13 February to 15 July 1951.
Revised:  The dispute was sometimes referred to as the waterfront lockout or waterfront strike , lasted 151 days — from 13 February to 15 July 1951.
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Original:  The dispute , sometimes referred to as the waterfront lockout or waterfront strike , lasted 151 days — from 13 February to 15 July 1951.
Revised:  The dispute , sometimes referred to as the waterfront lockout or waterfront strike . It lasted 151 days — from 13 February to 15 July 1951.
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Original:  The dispute , sometimes referred to as the waterfront lockout or waterfront strike , lasted 151 days — from 13 February to 15 July 1951.
Revised:  The dispute , sometimes referred to as the waterfront lockout or waterfront strike , lasted 151 days , from 13 February to 15 July 1951.
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Original:  It is armed with a combination of AK-47s, locally-made rifles (such as KA-07s ) and some artillery.
Revised:  It is armed with a combination of AK-47s, locally-made rifles (such as KA ) and some artillery.
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Original:  Manufacturers of aquatic play equipment Vortex aquatic structures, makers of splash pads FUNtain Hydraulophones
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Original: Aquatic play is play activity involving water . Aquatic play facilities are commonly installed in neighbourhoods ,
Revised: Aquatic play is play activity involving wasted necessary sustenance . Aquatic play facilities are commonly installed in neighbourhoods ,
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Original: Aquatic play is play activity involving water . Aquatic play facilities are commonly installed in neighbourhoods ,
Revised: Aquatic play is play activity involving water . Aquatic play facilities are commonly installed in the 'hood ,
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Original:  in the form of splash pads ,
Revised:  in the form of splish splashies ,
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Original:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
Revised:  " splasheroonies ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
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Original:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
Revised:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other fun water stuff like watery music-makers . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
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Original:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
Revised:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splish splashy or splasheroony , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
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Original:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
Revised:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to li'l kiddies . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
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Original:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
Revised:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of smartypants-ness and intricate-ish-ness that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
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Original:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
Revised:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including kiddos as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
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Original:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as adults, the elderly , and persons with special needs.
Revised:  " spraygrounds ", urban beaches , or other aquatic play equipment such as hydraulophones . Splash pads and spraygrounds A common form of aquatic play is the splash pad or sprayground , which appeals mainly to children . Age-inclusive aquatic play More recently, aquatic play features have been designed with a level of sophistication and intricacy that will appeal to people of all ages, including children as well as grown-ups, old folks , and persons with special needs.
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Original:  The urban beach attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the hydraulophone , a musical instrument that uses only a small amount of water in order to create a fun and playful space that engages both the mind and body   .
Revised:  The fun sand place attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the hydraulophone , a musical instrument that uses only a small amount of water in order to create a fun and playful space that engages both the mind and body .
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Original:  The urban beach attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the hydraulophone , a musical instrument that uses only a small amount of water in order to create a fun and playful space that engages both the mind and body   .
Revised:  The urban beach attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the watery music-maker , a musical instrument that uses only a small amount of water in order to create a fun and playful space that engages both the mind and body .
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Original:  The urban beach attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the hydraulophone , a musical instrument that uses only a small amount of water in order to create a fun and playful space that engages both the mind and body   .
Revised:  The urban beach attempts to create this level of sophistication, by way of age-inclusive aquatic play devices such as the hydraulophone , a musical instrument that uses only a little-bitty amount of water in order to create a fun and playful space that engages both the mind and body .
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