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Original:  Even before the latest flooding, the severe drought in the north has caused a shortfall in China's crop yields that has begun to affect the price of wheat , and will likely propel a price increase in global markets.
Revised:  Even before the latest flooding, the severe drought in the north has caused a shortfall in China's crop yields that will likely affect the price of wheat , and will likely propel a price increase in global markets.
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Original:  Even before the latest flooding, the severe drought in the north has caused a shortfall in China's crop yields that has begun to affect the price of wheat , and will likely propel a price increase in global markets.
Revised:  Even before the latest flooding, the severe drought in the north has caused a shortfall in China's crop yields that has begun to affect the price of wheat and may propel a price increase in global markets.
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Original:  Heavy rains in June have forced China to evacuate more than 550,000 people due to the massive floods devastating the central and southern parts of the country, causing rivers to overflow their banks and triggering mudslides.
Revised:  Massive floods in June have forced China to evacuate more than 550,000 people due to the massive floods devastating the central and southern parts of the country, causing rivers to overflow their banks and triggering mudslides.
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Original:  Heavy rains in June have forced China to evacuate more than 550,000 people due to the massive floods devastating the central and southern parts of the country, causing rivers to overflow their banks and triggering mudslides.
Revised:  Heavy rains in June have forced China to evacuate more than 550,000 people . Heavy rains have devastated the central and southern parts of the country, causing rivers to overflow their banks and triggering mudslides.
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Original:  Overall, on 40 rivers the water levels are above safety limits, stressing dykes and dams including those on China's largest waterway, the , which is flooding downstream but is experiencing a severe drought near its source in the north.
Revised:  Overall, 40 rivers the water levels are above safety limits, stressing dykes and dams including those on China's largest waterway, the , which is flooding downstream but is experiencing a severe drought near its source in the north.
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Original:  Overall, on 40 rivers the water levels are above safety limits, stressing dykes and dams including those on China's largest waterway, the , which is flooding downstream but is experiencing a severe drought near its source in the north.
Revised:  Overall, on 40 rivers have risen above safe limits, stressing dykes and dams including those on China's largest waterway, the , which is flooding downstream but is experiencing a severe drought near its source in the north.
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Original:  According to , local authorities are distributing a box of and a carton of bottled water to those affect by the flood.
Revised:  According to , local authorities are distributing a box of and a carton of bottled water to those affected by the flood.
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Original:  Even before the latest flooding, the severe drought in the north has caused a shortfall in China's crop yields that will likely affect the price of wheat and may propel a price increase in global markets.
Revised:  Even before the latest flooding, the severe drought in the north caused a shortfall in China's crop yields that will likely affect the price of wheat and may propel a price increase in global markets.
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Original:  The rains follow the worst in China in  50 years which has decimated crops yields.
Revised:  The rains follow the worst in China in over 50 years which has decimated crops yields.
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Original:  The rains follow the worst in China in  50 years which has decimated crops yields.
Revised:  The rains follow the worst in China in 50 years and has decimated crops yields.
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Original:  The rains follow the worst in China in over 50 years and has decimated crops yields.
Revised:  The rains follow the worst in China in over 50 years , which has decimated crops yields.
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Original:  Massive floods in June have forced China to evacuate more than 550,000 people .
Revised:  Heavy June rainfall has forced China to evacuate more than 550,000 people .
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Original:  The rains follow the worst in China in over 50 years, which has decimated crops yields.
Revised:  The rains follow the worst in China in over 50 years, which has decimated crop yields.
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Original:  Overall, 40 rivers have risen above safe limits, stressing dykes and dams including those on China's largest waterway, the , which is flooding downstream but is experiencing a severe drought near its source in the north.
Revised:  Overall, 40 rivers have risen above safe limits, stressing dykes and dams including those on China's largest waterway, the , which is flooding downstream while experiencing a severe drought near its source in the north.
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Original:  Since then, more than a million and a half people have been evacuated in the central and southern regions of the country and at least 168 deaths have been reported.
Revised:  Since then, more than a million and a half people have been displaced in the central and southern regions of the country and at least 168 deaths have been reported.
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Original:  But villagers have reported that survival is difficult, especially for those still trapped by the flood waters in small villages, and distribution of aid is slow, with some getting nothing .
Revised:  But villagers have reported that survival is difficult, especially for those still trapped by the flood waters in small villages, and distribution of aid is slow, with some not receiving any .
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Original:  Heavy June rainfall and a giant turtle has forced China to evacuate more than 550,000 people from their homes.
Revised:  Heavy June rainfall has forced China to evacuate more than 550,000 people from their homes.
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Original:  The milatary was criticised in November for a slow response to the north's shelling of island, which killed four  
Revised:  The milatary was criticised in November for a slow response to the north's shelling of island, which killed four . 
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Original:  The Marines fired from nearby .
Revised:  The marines fired from nearby .
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Original:  The two Koreas have poorrelations at present, having never signed a peace treaty since the close of the 1953 .
Revised:  At present, relations between the two Korean countries are poor, with neither having signed a peace treaty since the close of the 1953 .
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Original:  The two Koreas have poorrelations at present, having never signed a peace treaty since the close of the 1953 .
Revised:  The two Koreas have poorrelations at present, having never signed a peace treaty since the end of the 1953 .
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Original:  South Korean media claimed yesterday the nation has US-built missiles capable of reaching the northern capital, and the south says the north is behind twin bombings that killed 50  last year.
Revised:  South Korean media claimed yesterday that the south has US-built missiles capable of reaching the northern capital, and the south says the north is behind twin bombings that killed 50 last year.
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Original:  South Korean media claimed yesterday the nation has US-built missiles capable of reaching the northern capital, and the south says the north is behind twin bombings that killed 50  last year.
Revised:  South Korean media claimed yesterday the nation has US-built missiles capable of reaching the northern capital, , and blamed the north for twin bombings that killed 50 last year.
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Original:  South Korean media claimed yesterday the nation has US-built missiles capable of reaching the northern capital, and the south says the north is behind twin bombings that killed 50  last year.
Revised:  South Korean media claimed yesterday the nation has US-built missiles capable of reaching the northern capital, and the south says the north is behind twin bombings that killed 50 people last year.
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Original:  Yesterday, the south said  all wish to defect and, per its policy, refused to hand them back.
Revised:  Yesterday, the south said that all wish to defect and, per its policy, refused to hand them back.
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Original:  The north's warned on Thursday  failure to do so could lead to further deteriorations . South Korean troops have been told by Defence Minister they are to fire at attacking North Koreans without waiting for or seeking instructions.
Revised:  The north's warned on Thursday that failure to do so could lead to further deteriorations . South Korean troops have been told by Defence Minister they are to fire at attacking North Koreans without waiting for or seeking instructions.
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Original:  The north's warned on Thursday  failure to do so could lead to further deteriorations . South Korean troops have been told by Defence Minister they are to fire at attacking North Koreans without waiting for or seeking instructions.
Revised:  The north's warned on Thursday failure to do so could lead to further deterioration in Korean relations . South Korean troops have been told by Defence Minister they are to fire at attacking North Koreans without waiting for or seeking instructions.
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Original:  The north's warned on Thursday  failure to do so could lead to further deteriorations . South Korean troops have been told by Defence Minister they are to fire at attacking North Koreans without waiting for or seeking instructions.
Revised:  The north's warned on Thursday failure to do so could lead to further deteriorations . South Korean troops have been told by Defence Minister to fire at attacking North Koreans without waiting for or seeking instructions.
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Original:  Take actions first and then report afterwards," he said on the frontline in March.
Revised:  Take actions first and then report afterwards," he said on the front line in March.
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Original:  The two riflemen who attacked the jet had recently been told the North had stepped up military action owing to heightened tensions.
Revised:  The two riflemen who attacked the jet had recently been told that the North was increasing military action due to heightened tensions.
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Original:  Increased training on aircraft identification is to be performed.
Revised:  As a result of the incident, increased training on aircraft identification is to be performed.
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Original:  Increased training on aircraft identification is to be performed.
Revised:  Increased training on aircraft identification will be performed.
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Original:  Asiana said they were unaware of the incident until contacted by the military and asked if the jet had been hit
Revised:  Asiana said they were unaware of the attack until contacted by the military and asked if the jet had been hit
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Original:  At present, relations between the two Korean countries are poor, with neither having signed a peace treaty since the end of  the 1953 .
Revised:  Relations between the two Korean countries are poor, with neither having signed a peace treaty since the end of the 1953 .
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Original:  At present, relations between the two Korean countries are poor, with neither having signed a peace treaty since the end of  the 1953 .
Revised:  At present, relations between the two Korean countries have been tense since the end of the 1953 .
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Original: Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years the only black in a white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
Revised: Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years the only black in the white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
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Original:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and rhythms a "muscular, melodic saxophone hooks that echoed , and early rock ’n’ roll," according to the New York Times.
Revised:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms "muscular, melodic saxophone hooks that echoed , and early rock ’n’ roll," according to the New York Times.
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Original:  He most recently played on 's latest album, " Born This Way ".
Revised:  He most recently played on 's latest album, " ".
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Original: Clarence Clemons, 1942-2011 Clarence Clemons , soulful saxophonist most noted for his forty years as a sideman in 's , died Saturday in a hospital in .
Revised: Clarence Clemons, 1942-2011 , soulful saxophonist most noted for his forty years as a sideman in 's , died Saturday in a hospital in .
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Original: Clarence Clemons, 1942-2011 Clarence Clemons , soulful saxophonist most noted for his forty years as a sideman in 's , died Saturday in a hospital in .
Revised: Clarence Clemons, 1942-2011 Clarence Clemons , soulful saxophonist most famed for his forty years as a sideman in 's , died Saturday in a hospital in .
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Original:  He acted in a movies such as 's "" and on TV shows like "".
Revised:  He acted in movies such as 's "" and on TV shows like "".
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Original:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms "muscular, melodic saxophone hooks that echoed , and early rock ’n’ roll ," according to the New York Times.
Revised:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms "muscular, melodic saxophone that echoed , and early rock ’n’ roll ," according to the New York Times.
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Original:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms "muscular, melodic saxophone hooks that echoed , and early rock ’n’ roll ," according to the New York Times.
Revised:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms "muscular, melodic saxophone hooks that echoed , and early ," according to the New York Times.
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Original: Clemons was born in Norfolk, Va. on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . However, he was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) he moved to the .
Revised: Clemons was born in Norfolk, Va. on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . However, he was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) and moved to the .
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Original: Clemons was born in Norfolk, Va. on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . However, he was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) and moved to the .
Revised: Clemons was born in on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . However, he was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) and moved to the .
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Original:  The cause was complications from a stroke he suffered about  week ago at his home.
Revised:  The cause was complications from a stroke he suffered about a week ago at his home.
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Original:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years  the only black in the  white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
Revised:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch frame, Clemons joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years the only black in the white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
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Original:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years  the only black in the  white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
Revised:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972. For all but two years the only black in the white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
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Original:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years  the only black in the  white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
Revised:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years , he was the only black in the white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
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Original:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years  the only black in the  white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
Revised:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years the only black in the largely white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
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Original:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years  the only black in the  white, working class group, and became one of the key influences in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
Revised:  He was 69. Called the "Big Man" because of his 6-foot 5-inch size, he joined Springteen's New Jersey band in 1972, for all but two years the only black in the white, working class group, and became a key influence in Springsteen's music as well as a trusted companion.
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Original:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms  "muscular, melodic saxophone that echoed , and early , " according to the New York Times.
Revised:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms "muscular, melodic saxophone that echoed , and early , " according to the New York Times.
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Original:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms  "muscular, melodic saxophone that echoed , and early , " according to the New York Times.
Revised:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms . According to the New York Times, he added "muscular, melodic saxophone that echoed , and early , " according to the New York Times.
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Original:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms  "muscular, melodic saxophone that echoed , and early , " according to the New York Times.
Revised:  He was a jovial on-stage presence and musically he added to the band's electric guitar sound and strong rhythms "muscular, melodic saxophone that echoed , and early " according to the New York Times.
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Original:  A signature sound for the E Street Band on songs such as "," and "" was his rollicking saxophone solos .
Revised:  A signature sound for the E Street Band on songs such as "," and "" .
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Original:  He also released  solo albums and played in other bands .
Revised:  He also released several solo albums and played in other bands .
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Original:  He most recently played on 's latest album, "".
Revised:  Most recently, he played on 's latest album, "".
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Original:  He actedin movies such as 's "" and on TV shows like "".
Revised:  Additionally, he occasionally acted, appearing in such movies as 's "" and on TV shows like "".
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Original:  He actedin movies such as 's "" and on TV shows like "".
Revised:  He actedin movies such as 's "" and various TV shows including "".
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Original:  He  jammed with President Bill Clinton at his first inaugural ball . Clemons was born in on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . However, he was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received  as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) and moved to the .
Revised:  He famously jammed with President Bill Clinton at his first inaugural ball . Clemons was born in on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . However, he was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) and moved to the .
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Original:  He  jammed with President Bill Clinton at his first inaugural ball . Clemons was born in on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . However, he was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received  as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) and moved to the .
Revised:  He jammed with President Bill Clinton at his first inaugural ball . Clemons was born in on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . He was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) and moved to the .
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Original:  He  jammed with President Bill Clinton at his first inaugural ball . Clemons was born in on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . However, he was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received  as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) and moved to the .
Revised:  He jammed with President Bill Clinton at his first inaugural ball . Clemons was born in on Jan. 11, 1942 and grew up in a religious environment, immersed in . However, he was drawn to rock ’n’ roll and received an as a Christmas gift an when he was nine, but he fell under the influence of (who played on the 1958 hit "" with the ) and moved to the .
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