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Original: The surgical option involves stopping blood flow to the varicose veins using noninvasive surgical techniques such as a procedure called embolization.
Revised: The surgical option involves stopping blood within the pelvic varicose veins using noninvasive surgical techniques such as a procedure called embolization.
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Original: The surgical option involves stopping blood flow to the varicose veins using noninvasive surgical techniques such as a procedure called embolization.
Revised: The surgical option involves stopping blood flow to the varicose veins using a minimally invasive procedure called a catheter directed embolization.
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Original:  Some research has suggested that  transvaginal duplex ultrasound  is the best test for pelvic venous reflux.
Revised:  Some research has suggested that ( transvaginal duplex ultrasound is the best test for pelvic venous reflux.
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Original:  Some research has suggested that  transvaginal duplex ultrasound  is the best test for pelvic venous reflux.
Revised:  Some research has suggested that transvaginal duplex ultrasound ) , is the best test for pelvic venous reflux.
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Original:  The terms refers to "the ways in which race, ethnicity, socioeconomic status, English proficiency, community wealth, familial situations, or other factors contribute to or perpetuate lower educational aspirations, achievement, and attainment for certain groups of students."
Revised:  The term refers to "the ways in which race, ethnicity, socioeconomic status, English proficiency, community wealth, familial situations, or other factors contribute to or perpetuate lower educational aspirations, achievement, and attainment for certain groups of students."
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Original: Heterosexual privilege Heterosexual privilege is "the rights and unearned advantages bestowed on heterosexuals in society".
Revised: Heterosexual privilege Heterosexual privilege can be defined as "the rights and unearned advantages bestowed on heterosexuals in society".
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Original: Opera glasses, also known as theater binoculars or Galilean binoculars, are compact, low-power optical magnification devices, usually used at performance events, whose name is derived from traditional use  at opera performances.
Revised: Opera glasses, also known as theater binoculars or Galilean binoculars, are compact, low-power optical magnification devices, usually used at performance events, whose name is derived from traditional use of binoculars at opera performances.
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Original:  The London Opera Glass Company was founded in 1913 and provides opera glasses in many of London's West End theatres.
Revised:  See also London Opera Glass Company was founded in 1913 and provides opera glasses in many of London's West End theatres.
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Original:  The London Opera Glass Company was founded in 1913 and provides opera glasses in many of London's West End theatres.
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Original:  They include: Barska Carson Eschenbach Optik KabukiGlasses LaScala Optics Levenhuk Vixen Optics%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Binoculars List of telescope types Monocular Spotting scope Telescope
Revised:  They include: Barska Carson Eschenbach Optik KabukiGlasses LaScala Optics Levenhuk Vixen Optics%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Monocular Spotting scope Telescope
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Original:  They include: Barska Carson Eschenbach Optik KabukiGlasses LaScala Optics Levenhuk Vixen Optics%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Binoculars List of telescope types Monocular Spotting scope Telescope
Revised:  They include: Barska Carson Eschenbach Optik KabukiGlasses LaScala Optics Levenhuk Vixen Optics%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Binoculars List of telescope types Monocular Spotting scope 
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Original:  a later proposal to send the Romanovs to a neutral port in the Baltic Sea via the  Duchy of Finland faced similar difficulties.
Revised:  a later proposal to send the Romanovs to a neutral port in the Baltic Sea via the Grand Duchy of Finland faced similar difficulties.
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Original: Police shot at the populace from rooftops, which incited riots.
Revised: Police shot at the populace which incited riots.
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Original:  Ultimately, progress was undermined by Nicholas's commitment to autocratic rule, strong aristocratic opposition , assassinations of key officials by revolutionaries, and defeats sustained by the Russian military in the Russo-Japanese War and World War I. By March 1917, public support for Nicholas had collapsed and he was forced to abdicate the throne, thereby ending the Romanov dynasty's 304-year rule of Russia (1613–1917).
Revised:  Ultimately, progress was undermined by Nicholas's commitment to autocratic rule, strong aristocratic opposition and defeats sustained by the Russian military in the Russo-Japanese War and World War I. By March 1917, public support for Nicholas had collapsed and he was forced to abdicate the throne, thereby ending the Romanov dynasty's 304-year rule of Russia (1613–1917).
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Original:  He expressed his racist and eugenist ideas in his 1919 book La Sélection Humaine.
Revised:  He expressed his eugenist ideas in his 1919 book La Sélection Humaine.
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Original:  He also believed in the inferiority of blacks , was a proponent of eugenics and presided over the French Eugenics Society towards the end of his life.
Revised:  He also believed in the inferiority of people of color , was a proponent of eugenics and presided over the French Eugenics Society towards the end of his life.
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Original: Resumption of racist attacks In February 2004 three Chinese restaurants in Perth where firebombed in the early hours of the morning.
Revised: Resumption of racist attacks In February 2004 three Chinese restaurants in Perth were firebombed in the early hours of the morning.
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Original:  At a second trial in August 1990, six members of ANM where found guilty, with van Tongeren was sentenced to 18 years on 53 counts.
Revised:  At a second trial in August 1990, six members of ANM were found guilty, with van Tongeren was sentenced to 18 years on 53 counts.
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Original: Peter Joseph "Jack" van Tongeren (born 1947) is the former leader of the West Australian neo-Nazi group Australian Nationalist Movement (ANM), a white supremacist and extreme right group.
Revised: Peter Joseph "Jack" van Tongeren (born 1947) is the former leader of the West Australian Neo-Nazi group Australian Nationalist Movement (ANM), a white supremacist and extreme right group.
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Original:  A tip-off to the police led them to the location where ANM's stolen goods where being stored and the arrest of van Tongeren's associates, Willey and John van Blitterswyk.
Revised:  A tip-off to the police led them to the location where ANM's stolen goods were being stored and the arrest of van Tongeren's associates, Willey and John van Blitterswyk.
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Original: Peter Joseph "Jack" van Tongeren (  born 1947) is the former leader of the West Australian Neo-Nazi group Australian Nationalist Movement (ANM), a white supremacist and extreme right group.
Revised: Peter Joseph "Jack" van Tongeren ( , ; born 1947) is the former leader of the West Australian Neo-Nazi group Australian Nationalist Movement (ANM), a white supremacist and extreme right group.
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Original:  born 1947) is the former leader of the West Australian Neo-Nazi group Australian Nationalist Movement (ANM), a white supremacist and extreme right group, and a successor organisation called the Australian Nationalist Worker's Union (ANWU).
Revised:  born 1947) is the former leader of the West Australian Neo-Nazi group Australian Nationalist Movement (ANM), a white supremacist and far-right group, and a successor organisation called the Australian Nationalist Worker's Union (ANWU).
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Original:  This is in contrast to the flora, which in this context refers to the assemblage of living plants that were growing in a particular area, whose fragmentary remains became entrapped within the sediment and then rock to form the macroflor 
Revised:  This is in contrast to the flora, which in this context refers to the assemblage of living plants that were growing in a particular area, whose fragmentary remains became entrapped within the sediment and then rock to form the macroflora. 
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Original: An  informal term used by many palaeobotanists to refer to an assemblage of plant fossils as preserved in the rock. . Cleal, C. J. & Thomas, B. A. (2009).
Revised: An informal term used by many palaeobotanists to refer to an assemblage of plant fossils as preserved in the rock. Cleal, C. J. & Thomas, B. A. (2009).
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Original:  This is in contrast to the flora, which in this context refers to the assemblage of living plants that were growing in a particular area, whose fragmentary remains became entrapped within the sediment and then rock to form the macroflora.
Revised:  This is in contrast to the flora, which in this context refers to the assemblage of living plants that were growing in a particular area, whose fragmentary remains became entrapped within the sediment from which the rock was formed and thus became the macroflora.
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Original:  Desert varnish is a thin coating (patina) of manganese, ironand clays on the surface of sun-baked boulders.
Revised:  Desert varnish is a thin coating (patina) of clays, iron, and manganese on the surface of sun-baked boulders.
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Original:  It is formed by colonies of bacteria living on the rock surface for thousands of years . Desert varnish is also prevalent in the Mojave desert and Great Basin geomorphic province.
Revised:  Micro-organisms may also play a role in their formation . Desert varnish is also prevalent in the Mojave desert and Great Basin geomorphic province.
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Original: Formation Several theories have been proposed for the formation of desert pavements.
Revised: Lily Several theories have been proposed for the formation of desert pavements.
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Original: Lily Several theories have been proposed for the formation of desert pavements.
Revised:  Several theories have been proposed for the formation of desert pavements.
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Original: Reg: In North Africa, a vast stony desert plain is known as reg.
Revised:  In North Africa, a vast stony desert plain is known as reg.
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Original:  This term is in contrast with erg, which refers to a sandy desert area.
Revised:  This is in contrast with erg, which refers to a sandy desert area.
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Original:  A common theory suggests  they form through the gradual removal of sand, dust and other fine-grained material by the wind and intermittent rain, leaving the larger fragments behind.
Revised:  A common theory suggests that they form through the gradual removal of sand, dust and other fine-grained material by the wind and intermittent rain, leaving the larger fragments behind.
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Original:  Foremost, the king made laws on the on collection of taxes and accountability of collectors to the king, prohibited the combining of raiyat (peasant) holdings, retroactively annulled such prior combinations, and provided for the escheat of the property of lamas upon death or retirement in order to curtail their number and power.
Revised:  Foremost, the king made laws on the collection of taxes and accountability of collectors to the king, prohibited the combining of raiyat (peasant) holdings, retroactively annulled such prior combinations, and provided for the escheat of the property of lamas upon death or retirement in order to curtail their number and power.
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Original:  Mayo-Clinic.org Degenerative disc disease causes narrowing of the spaces  "Degenerative Disk Disease,"
Revised:  Mayo-Clinic.org Degenerative disc disease causes narrowing of the spaces . "Degenerative Disk Disease,"
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Original:  Mayfieldclinic.com Facet joints break down Facet joints may hypertrophy Compression fractures of the spine, which are common in osteoporosis"Causes of Spinal Compression Fractures,", WebMD Cysts form on the facet joints causing compression of the spinal sac of nerves (thecal sac) Congenital Spinal canal is too small at birth Structural deformities of the vertebrae may cause narrowing of the spinal canal 
Revised:  Mayfieldclinic.com Facet joints break down Facet joints may hypertrophy Compression fractures of the spine, which are common in osteoporosis"Causes of Spinal Compression Fractures,", WebMD Cysts form on the facet joints causing compression of the spinal sac of nerves (thecal sac) Congenital Spinal canal is too small at birth Structural deformities of the vertebrae may cause narrowing of the spinal canal .
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Original:  X-Rays are performed followed by a CT scan of the spine to help see narrowing of the spinal canal.
Revised:  X-rays are performed followed by a CT scan of the spine to help see narrowing of the spinal canal.
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Original: Non-surgical treatments The effectiveness of non surgical treatments is unclear as they have not been well studied.
Revised: Non-surgical treatments The effectiveness of non-surgical treatments is unclear as they have not been well studied.
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Original:  Interlaminar implant: This is a non-fusion U-shaped device which is placed between two bones in the lower back that maintains motion in the spine and keeps the spine stable after a lumbar decompressive surgery.
Revised:  Interlaminar implant: This is a non-fusion U-shaped device that is placed between two bones in the lower back that maintains motion in the spine and keeps the spine stable after a lumbar decompressive surgery.
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Original:  The Longitudinal Framingham Heart Study found 1\% of men and 1.5\% of women had vertebral slippage at  mean age of 54.
Revised:  The Longitudinal Framingham Heart Study found 1\% of men and 1.5\% of women had vertebral slippage at a mean age of 54.
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Original:  In lumbar stenosis, the spinal nerve roots in the lower back are compressed which can lead to symptoms of sciatica (tingling, weakness, or numbness that radiates from the low back and into the buttocks and legs).
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Original:  Members have priority only in allocation of accommodation and claim a minimum  of 50\% reduction . Category II: located in popular areas;
Revised:  Members have priority only in allocation of accommodation and claim a minimum discount of 50\% reduction . Category II: located in popular areas;
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Original:  Members have priority only in allocation of accommodation and claim a minimum  of 50\% reduction . Category II: located in popular areas;
Revised:  Members have priority only in allocation of accommodation and claim a minimum of 50\% . Category II: located in popular areas;
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Original:  These include: better sleeping accommodation , mountaineer's meals, hot water for tea, the right to provide one's own food and alcohol-free drink for a fee .
Revised:  These include: reduced accommodation rates , mountaineer's meals, hot water for tea, the right to provide one's own food and alcohol-free drink for a fee .
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Original: Bernama , "The Star", Thursday September 25 , 2008 In 1883, at the age of 20 years old, the courteous and respected Agent of the Company in Brunei, Kapitan Kee Kim Swee was appointed as Datuk Temenggung over the Chinese community by Sultan Abdul MominSabah State Archive, "The North Borneo Herald" 1st July 1883..
Revised: Bernama , "The Star", Thursday 25 , 2008 In 1883, at the age of 20 years old, the courteous and respected Agent of the Company in Brunei, Kapitan Kee Kim Swee was appointed as Datuk Temenggung over the Chinese community by Sultan Abdul MominSabah State Archive, "The North Borneo Herald" 1st July 1883..
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Original: Bernama , "The Star", Thursday September 25 , 2008 In 1883, at the age of 20 years old, the courteous and respected Agent of the Company in Brunei, Kapitan Kee Kim Swee was appointed as Datuk Temenggung over the Chinese community by Sultan Abdul MominSabah State Archive, "The North Borneo Herald" 1st July 1883..
Revised: Bernama , "The Star", Thursday September 25 , 2008 In 1883, at the age of 20 years old, the courteous and respected Agent of the Company in Brunei, Kapitan Kee Kim Swee was appointed as Datuk Temenggung over the Chinese community by Sultan Abdul MominSabah State Archive, "The North Borneo Herald" 1 July 1883..
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Original:  He was appointed as the first custom examiner and revenue collector by the British North Borneo (Chartered) Company in Tawau, 1894.
Revised:  He was appointed as the first customs examiner and revenue collector by the British North Borneo (Chartered) Company in Tawau, 1894.
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Original:  A year later, Tawau development was entrusted to his hands by British Administration, he became the first Pengulu or Orang Kaya (OKK) in Tawau, Sabah.
Revised:  A year later, Tawau development was entrusted to his hands by the British administration. He became the first Pengulu or Orang Kaya (OKK) in Tawau, Sabah.
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Original:  Tawau (also known as Tanjung) became a modern town under Kee Kim Swee's lead who engineered Tawau into a business and commercial area in the early 1900s.
Revised:  Tawau (also known as Tanjung) became a modern town under Kee Kim Swee's lead , as he engineered Tawau into a business and commercial area in the early 1900s.
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Original: Bernama , "The Star", Thursday  25 September 2008 He was born in 1863.
Revised: Bernama , "The Star", Thursday , 25 September 2008 He was born in 1863.
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Original: Bernama , "The Star", Thursday  25 September 2008 He was born in 1863.
Revised: Bernama , "The Star", Thursday 25 September 2008. He was born in 1863.
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Original:  Little was known about his biological mother.
Revised:  Little is known about his biological mother.
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Original:  He had a step parent known by the name Kipas.
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Original:  In 1883, at the age of 20 years old,  the courteous and respected Agent of the Company in Brunei, Kapitan Kee Kim Swee was appointed as Datuk Temenggung over the Chinese community by Sultan Abdul MominSabah State Archive, "The North Borneo Herald" 1 July 1883..
Revised:  In 1883, at the age of 20 years old, as the courteous and respected Agent of the Company in Brunei, Kapitan Kee Kim Swee was appointed as Datuk Temenggung over the Chinese community by Sultan Abdul MominSabah State Archive, "The North Borneo Herald" 1 July 1883..
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Original:  In 1885, while on a trading journey with his father to Sandakan, their Tongkang encountered a mishaps and capsized at the Marudu Bay.
Revised:  In 1885, while on a trading journey with his father to Sandakan, their Tongkang boat encountered a mishap and capsized at the Marudu Bay.
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Original:  Kee Kim Swee survived and were rescued by villagers , he settled in the residence of a Suluk man named Dato Husin until his recovery.
Revised:  Kee Kim Swee survived and was rescued by villagers , he settled in the residence of a Suluk man named Dato Husin until his recovery.
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Original:  Kee Kim Swee survived and were rescued by villagers , he settled in the residence of a Suluk man named Dato Husin until his recovery.
Revised:  Kee Kim Swee survived and were rescued by villagers . He settled in the residence of a Suluk man named Dato Husin until his recovery.
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Original:  In 1894, Kee Kim Swee was recruited by the British North Borneo Chartered Company as a custom examiner and revenue collector in Tawau.
Revised:  In 1894, Kee Kim Swee was recruited by the British North Borneo Chartered Company as a customs examiner and revenue collector in Tawau.
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Original:  One of his many tasks was to collect a one dollar poll tax from the residents.
Revised:  One of his many tasks was to collect a one-dollar poll tax from the residents.
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Original:  His unique ability to converse in Arabic and Jawi literate, served as a link between the native and Chinese groups with the government.
Revised:  His unique ability to converse in Arabic , and also Jawi literate, served as a link between the native and Chinese groups with the government.
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Original:  Thus, he was often called upon for his view and  provide representation.
Revised:  Thus, he was often called upon for his view and to provide representation.
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Original:  9838121088 He embraced Islam when he married a Mindanao girl of Sulu Parang Tapol, Jumaatiah Ame Maidin  and later changed his name into Kee Abdullah.
Revised:  9838121088 He embraced Islam when he married a Mindanao girl of Sulu Parang Tapol, Jumaatiah Ame Maidin , and later changed his name into Kee Abdullah.
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Original:  Omar (1916–1931) Child name not recorded Kee Abdul Jalil (1919–1990) Kee Dzawiyah (1920–1921) some children's names aren't recorded His early marriage with a Chinese woman from Kudat gave them 3 children, 2 boys and 1 girl.
Revised:  Omar (1916–1931) Child name not recorded Kee Abdul Jalil (1919–1990) Kee Dzawiyah (1920–1921) Some of the children's names aren't recorded His early marriage with a Chinese woman from Kudat gave them 3 children, 2 boys and 1 girl.
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Original:  Omar (1916–1931) Child name not recorded Kee Abdul Jalil (1919–1990) Kee Dzawiyah (1920–1921) some children's names aren't recorded His early marriage with a Chinese woman from Kudat gave them 3 children, 2 boys and 1 girl.
Revised:  Omar (1916–1931) Child name not recorded Kee Abdul Jalil (1919–1990) Kee Dzawiyah (1920–1921) some children's names were not recorded. His early marriage with a Chinese woman from Kudat gave them 3 children, 2 boys and 1 girl.
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Original:  Both of his sons went back to China  while the girl changed her surname into Chin by marriage.
Revised:  Both of his sons went back to China , while the girl changed her surname into Chin by marriage.
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Original:  Both of his sons went back to China  while the girl changed her surname into Chin by marriage.
Revised:  Both of his sons went back to China while the girl changed her surname into "Chin" by marriage.
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Original: In 1883, at the age of 20 years old , as the courteous and respected Agent of the Company in Brunei, Kapitan Kee Kim Swee was appointed as Datuk Temenggung over the Chinese community by Sultan Abdul Momin.
Revised: In 1883, at the age of 20 years , as the courteous and respected Agent of the Company in Brunei, Kapitan Kee Kim Swee was appointed as Datuk Temenggung over the Chinese community by Sultan Abdul Momin.
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Original:    Diabetes The B4 strain of Coxsackie viruses was suggested to be a possible cause of Diabetes mellitus type 1 (T1D).
Revised:  Diabetes The B4 strain of Coxsackie viruses was suggested to be a possible cause of diabetes mellitus type 1 (T1D).
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Original:  As of October, 2014, All My Movies has almost 25,000 registered users worldwide.
Revised:  . All My Movies has almost 25,000 registered users worldwide.
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Original:  As of October, 2014, All My Movies has almost 25,000 registered users worldwide.
Revised:  As of October, 2014, All My Movies 
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Original:  All My Movies uses Amazon Web Services and a dozen of other APIs provided by the online movie databases for automatical movie details retrieval.
Revised:  uses Amazon Web Services and a dozen of other APIs provided by the online movie databases for automatical movie details retrieval.
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