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Original:   Chamberlain looks on, unimpressed  |alt=A cartoon;
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Original:  In Natal Andries Pretorius defeated more than 10,000 of Dingane's Zulus at the Battle of Blood River on 16 December 1838, a date subsequently marked by the Boers as Dingaansdag ("Dingane's Day") or the Day of the Vow.
Revised:  In Natal Andries Pretorius defeated more than 10,000 of Dingane's Zulus at the Battle of Blood River on 16 December 1838, a date subsequently marked by the Boers as the Day of the Vow.
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Original:  The family was of Dutch-speaking Afrikaner or Boer background, of German, French Huguenot and Dutch stock.
Revised:  The family was of Dutch-speaking Afrikaner background, of German, French Huguenot and Dutch stock.
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Original: Epizootiology, epizoology, or veterinary epidemiology , is the study of disease patterns within animal populations.
Revised: Epizootiology, epizoology, or veterinary epidemiology is the study of disease patterns within animal populations.
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Original:  See epidemiology.
Revised:  See also Epizootic Epidemiology
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Original:  The resource fragmentation hypothesis was first proposed by Janzen & Pond (1975), and says that as species richness becomes large there is not a linear increase in the number of parasitoid species that can be supported.
Revised: Description The resource fragmentation hypothesis was first proposed by Janzen & Pond (1975), and says that as species richness becomes large there is not a linear increase in the number of parasitoid species that can be supported.
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Original: Description The resource fragmentation hypothesis was first proposed by Janzen & Pond (1975), and says that as species richness becomes large there is not a linear increase in the number of parasitoid species that can be supported.
Revised:  The resource fragmentation hypothesis was first proposed by Janzen & Pond (1975), and says that as species richness becomes large there is not a linear increase in the number of parasitoid species that can be supported.
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Original: References Janzen, D.H. & Pond, C.M. (1975) A comparison by sweep sampling of the arthropod fauna of secondary vegetation in Michigan, England, and Costa Rica.
Revised: Further references Janzen, D.H. & Pond, C.M. (1975) A comparison by sweep sampling of the arthropod fauna of secondary vegetation in Michigan, England, and Costa Rica.
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Original: Further reading Gauld, I., Gaston, K., Janzen, D. (1992) Plant allelochemicals, tritrophic interactions and the anomalous diversity of tropical parasitoids: the “nasty” host hypothesis.
Revised: References Janzen, D. (1992) Plant allelochemicals, tritrophic interactions and the anomalous diversity of tropical parasitoids: the “nasty” host hypothesis.
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Original:  Further references Janzen, D. H. & Pond, C.M. (1975) A comparison by sweep sampling of the arthropod fauna of secondary vegetation in Michigan, England, and Costa Rica.
Revised:  H. & Pond, C.M. (1975) A comparison by sweep sampling of the arthropod fauna of secondary vegetation in Michigan, England, and Costa Rica.
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Original:  Transactions of the Royal Entomological Society of London, 127, 33-50  &  .
Revised:  Transactions of the Royal Entomological Society of London, 127, 33-50 . & .
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Original:  In recent years, the idea of a universal reason has been brought up in discussions of AI and other topics regarding consciousness for it provides a stage of universality for a mechanistic description of thought.
Revised:  In recent years, the idea of a universal reason has been brought up in discussions of artificial intelligence and other topics regarding consciousness for it provides a stage of universality for a mechanistic description of thought.
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Original: The idea of a Universal Reason implies an underpinning system of perception and conception of all forms of complexity.
Revised: The idea of a Universal reason implies an underpinning system of perception and conception of all forms of complexity.
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Original:     In 2006 Bloemhof returned to the thriller genre with the novel Spinnerak .
Revised:  All in all, the author has now published more than 60 books. He likes to misquote Alfred Hitchcock by summing up his writing as follows: “Some people write slices of life. I have always preferred slices of cake.” In 2006 Bloemhof returned to the thriller genre with the novel Spinnerak .
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Original:     In 2006 Bloemhof returned to the thriller genre with the novel Spinnerak .
Revised:  In his spare time (of which he insists he has lots) he does copywriting and editing work, writes film and book reviews for diverse publications, collects CDs and Blu-Rays and of course has the very demanding job of attending to the needs of four cats. He has also branched out into script- and song-writing .
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Original:  Agent Snoet en die Kattekwaad (2005) Stad aan die einde van die wêreld (2007) City at the end of the world ( 2009 ) Moenie dat die grootmense hoor nie (2009) Agent Snoet en die Hondelewe (2008) Flipom (2009) Agent Snoet en die Groen Genugtig (2010) 13 spookstories (2010) Die land verby donker (2012) Vreeslike versies (2012) Nog 13 spookstories (2012) Koue rillings (2013) K-TV Holiday Fun (fun and activity book) (1997) * in the Rillers/Chillers series (only Afrikaans titles are given)
Revised:  Agent Snoet en die Kattekwaad (2005) Stad aan die einde van die wêreld / City at the end of the world ( 2009 ) Moenie dat die grootmense hoor nie (2009) Agent Snoet en die Hondelewe (2008) Flipom (2009) Agent Snoet en die Groen Genugtig (2010) 13 spookstories (2010) Die land verby donker (2012) Vreeslike versies (2012) Nog 13 spookstories (2012) Koue rillings (2013) K-TV Holiday Fun (fun and activity book) (1997) * in the Rillers/Chillers series (only Afrikaans titles are given)
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Original:  Agent Snoet en die Kattekwaad (2005) Stad aan die einde van die wêreld (2007) City at the end of the world ( 2009 ) Moenie dat die grootmense hoor nie (2009) Agent Snoet en die Hondelewe (2008) Flipom (2009) Agent Snoet en die Groen Genugtig (2010) 13 spookstories (2010) Die land verby donker (2012) Vreeslike versies (2012) Nog 13 spookstories (2012) Koue rillings (2013) K-TV Holiday Fun (fun and activity book) (1997) * in the Rillers/Chillers series (only Afrikaans titles are given)
Revised:  Agent Snoet en die Kattekwaad (2005) Stad aan die einde van die wêreld (2007) City at the end of the world ( 2007 ) Moenie dat die grootmense hoor nie (2009) Agent Snoet en die Hondelewe (2008) Flipom (2009) Agent Snoet en die Groen Genugtig (2010) 13 spookstories (2010) Die land verby donker (2012) Vreeslike versies (2012) Nog 13 spookstories (2012) Koue rillings (2013) K-TV Holiday Fun (fun and activity book) (1997) * in the Rillers/Chillers series (only Afrikaans titles are given)
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Original:  His writing career was activated in grade 9 when his English teacher awarded him 97\% for a short story .
Revised:  In Grade 9 when his English teacher awarded him 97\% for a short story .
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Original:  His writing career was activated in grade 9 when his English teacher awarded him 97\% for a short story .
Revised:  His writing career was activated in grade 9 his English teacher awarded him 97\% for a short story .
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Original:  He didn’t attempt writing a novel until some years after leaving school, chiefly because he believed there was no room for “his type of story” in what was  a rather conservative Afrikaans market.
Revised:  He didn’t attempt to write a novel until some years after leaving school, chiefly because he believed there was no room for “his type of story” in what was a rather conservative Afrikaans market.
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Original:  He didn’t attempt writing a novel until some years after leaving school, chiefly because he believed there was no room for “his type of story” in what was  a rather conservative Afrikaans market.
Revised:  He didn’t attempt writing a novel until some years after leaving school, chiefly because he believed there was no room for “his type of story” in what was then a rather conservative Afrikaans market.
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Original:  When he did write it, his vision was fully formed, titled Die nag het net een oog, a Gothic novel set in a small (and totally un-Gothic) rural community .
Revised:  Die Nag Het Net Een Oog was a Gothic novel set in a small (and totally un-Gothic) rural community .
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Original:  For this in 1991 he won the coveted De Kat prize , at that time the country’s most prestigious literary award.
Revised:  For this in 1991 he won the De Kat Prize , at that time the country’s most prestigious literary award.
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Original:  Many books for adults have followed, as have many awards and nominations.
Revised:  Many books for adults followed, as have many awards and nominations.
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Original:  Many books for adults have followed, as have many awards and nominations.
Revised:  Many books for adults have followed, as did numerous awards and nominations.
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Original:  This prolific writer ’s adult work explores thriller, supernatural and more conventional dramatic themes.
Revised:  Bloemhof ’s adult work explores thriller, supernatural and more conventional dramatic themes.
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Original:  This prolific writer ’s adult work explores thriller, supernatural and more conventional dramatic themes.
Revised:  This prolific writer ’s adult work contains thriller, supernatural and more conventional dramatic themes.
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Original:  To date he has also written a cabaret as well as award-winning stage plays , radio dramas and serials.
Revised:  To date he has also written a cabaret as well as award-winning stage plays and radio dramas and serials.
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Original:  These were regular winners in the annual ATKV-Veertjie Competition, in which there is no academic panel but a hundred readers of the relevant age evaluate the books.
Revised:  These were regular winners in the annual ATKV-Veertjie Competition, in which readers of the relevant age evaluate the books.
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Original:  The author considers this kind of competition “the most official of recognitions” . François Bloemhof still is the first Afrikaans author to publish a comic strip series, the highly successful Agent Snoet books in which a hapless secret agent is aided by his faithful yet domineering Siamese cat, Felino.
Revised:  The author considers this kind of competition “the most official of recognitions” . Bloemhof was the first Afrikaans author to publish a comic strip series, the highly successful Agent Snoet books in which a hapless secret agent is aided by his faithful yet domineering Siamese cat, Felino.
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Original:  The author considers this kind of competition “the most official of recognitions” . François Bloemhof still is the first Afrikaans author to publish a comic strip series, the highly successful Agent Snoet books in which a hapless secret agent is aided by his faithful yet domineering Siamese cat, Felino.
Revised:  The author considers this kind of competition “the most official of recognitions” . François Bloemhof still is the first Afrikaans author to publish a comic strip series, the Agent Snoet books in which a hapless secret agent is aided by his faithful yet domineering Siamese cat, Felino.
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Original:  World-firsts by this author were an interactive newspaper serial (in Rapport);
Revised:  World-firsts by this author include an interactive newspaper serial (in Rapport);
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Original:  a Flipom  which is a two-in-one book with two covers that can be read first from either side , both stories (one in a horror vein, the other with a sci-fi slant) having the same characters;
Revised:  a Flipom , which is a two-in-one book with two covers that can be read first from either side , both stories (one in a horror vein, the other with a sci-fi slant) having the same characters;
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Original:  a Flipom  which is a two-in-one book with two covers that can be read first from either side , both stories (one in a horror vein, the other with a sci-fi slant) having the same characters;
Revised:  a Flipom which is a two-in-one book with two covers that can be read first from either side and with both stories having the same characters;
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Original:  and a novel that includes an author-composed soundtrack CD performed by renowned South African musicians and singers.
Revised:  and a novel including an author-composed soundtrack CD performed by renowned South African musicians and singers.
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Original:  All in all, the author has now published more than 60 books .
Revised:  Bloemhof has now published more than 60 books .
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Original:  They have a daughter named URL Category:1977 births Category:Alumni of the University of Birmingham Category:Alumni of the University of Manchester Category:English female triathletes Category:Ironman world champions Category:Living people Category:Officers of the Order of the British Empire Category: Sportspeople from Bury St Edmunds Category: People from Feltwell Category:People in international development  Category:The Sunday Times Sportswoman of the Year winne
Revised:  They have a daughter named URL Category:1977 births Category:Alumni of the University of Birmingham Category:Alumni of the University of Manchester Category:English female triathletes Category:Ironman world champions Category:Living people Category:Officers of the Order of the British Empire Category: People from Feltwell Category:People in international development Category:The Sunday Times Sportswoman of the Year winne
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Original:  They have a daughter named URL Category:1977 births Category:Alumni of the University of Birmingham Category:Alumni of the University of Manchester Category:English female triathletes Category:Ironman world champions Category:Living people Category:Officers of the Order of the British Empire Category: Sportspeople from Bury St Edmunds Category: People from Feltwell Category:People in international development  Category:The Sunday Times Sportswoman of the Year winne
Revised:  They have a daughter named URL Category:1977 births Category:Alumni of the University of Birmingham Category:Alumni of the University of Manchester Category:English female triathletes Category:Ironman world champions Category:Living people Category:Officers of the Order of the British Empire Category: Sportspeople from Bury St Edmunds Category: People from Feltwell Category:People in international development Category:Sportspeople from Bury St Edmunds Category:The Sunday Times Sportswoman of the Year winne
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Original:  She later acknowledged that the crash was a blessing in disguise , enforcing a mental and physical break and enabling her to focus on other areas of improvement such as her strength and to properly resolve her hamstring problems, which had been hampering her running.
Revised:  She later acknowledged that the crash had a positive outcome , enforcing a mental and physical break and enabling her to focus on other areas of improvement such as her strength and to properly resolve her hamstring problems, which had been hampering her running.
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Original: See also External links Hunt Institute for Botanical Documentation plant growth and the plant cell from Kimball's Biology Pages Botanical Society of America: What is Botany?
Revised:  External links Hunt Institute for Botanical Documentation plant growth and the plant cell from Kimball's Biology Pages Botanical Society of America: What is Botany?
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Original: External links Hunt Institute for Botanical Documentation plant growth and the plant cell from Kimball's Biology Pages Botanical Society of America: What is Botany?
Revised: External links Hunt Institute for Botanical Documentation Plant growth and the plant cell from Kimball's Biology Pages Botanical Society of America: What is Botany?
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Original:  Science and Plants for Schools Teaching Documents about Botany Teaching documents, lecture notes and tutorials online: an annotated link directory.
Revised:  Science Plants for Schools Teaching Documents about Botany Teaching documents, lecture notes and tutorials online: an annotated link directory.
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Original:  He had the support of the US for his staunch opposition to communism, which would presumably make him a roadblock to communist schemes in Africa.
Revised:  He had the support of the US for his staunch opposition to communism, which would presumably make him a roadblock to communist activities in Africa.
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Original:  His father transferred him to a nearby school in Linggi in 1909, with hopes that his son would be become a ulama, where Zainal Abidin would learn the fields of Arabic language and Islamic jurispudence, among other things.
Revised:  His father transferred him to a nearby school in Linggi in 1909, with hopes that his son would be become an ulama, where Zainal Abidin would learn the fields of Arabic language and Islamic jurispudence, among other things.
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Original: He was not a traitor of BD ! Rather a well qualified leaders who is sole founder of Chittagong Univ, Chittagong Med college , Chittagong engineering college.
Revised: He was a traitor of BD ! Rather a well qualified leaders who is sole founder of Chittagong Univ, Chittagong Med college , Chittagong engineering college.
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Original: Will be helpful Theory and applications of operating room management This discussion addresses capitalistic healthcare markets.
Revised:  Theory and applications of operating room management This discussion addresses capitalistic healthcare markets.
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Original:  Operating room management is the science of how to run an Operating Room Suite.
Revised:  canOperating room management is the science of how to run an Operating Room Suite.
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Original: Image:Operating theatre.jpg|350px|An operating theatre (gynecological hospital of Medical University of SilesiaBytom)]] canOperating room management is the science of how to run an Operating Room Suite.
Revised: Image:Operating theatre.jpg|350px|An operating theatre (gynecological hospital of Medical University of SilesiaBytom)]] Operating room management is the science of how to run an Operating Room Suite.
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Original:  An emerging field, operating room management is increasingly studied as how to best:
Revised:  An most crucial field, operating room management is increasingly studied as how to best:
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Original:  1) ensure patient safety and optimal patient outcome, 2) provide surgeons with appropriate access to the OR so that patients can have operations in a timely manner, 3) maximize the efficiency of operating room utilization, staff, and materials, 4) decrease patient delays, 5) enhance satisfaction among patients, staff, and physicians . Surgical suite personnel The management of a surgical suite must take into account all cooperating team members.
Revised:  1) ensure patient safety and optimal patient outcome, 2) provide surgeons with appropriate access to the OR so that patients can have operations in a timely manner, 3) maximize the efficiency of operating room utilization, staff, and materials, 4) decrease patient delays, 5) enhance satisfaction among patients, staff, and surgeons . Surgical suite personnel The management of a surgical suite must take into account all cooperating team members.
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Original: Robitaille has published two autobiographies: Ma carrière, ma vie ("My Career, My Life", 1980) and « Un long cri dans la nuit: Cinq Années à l'Asile » ("A Long Cry in the Night: Five Years in the Asylum", 1990).
Revised: Robitaille has published two autobiographies: Ma carrière, ma vie ("My Career, My Life", 1980) and Un long cri dans la nuit: Cinq Années à l'Asile » ("A Long Cry in the Night: Five Years in the Asylum", 1990).
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Original: Robitaille has published two autobiographies: Ma carrière, ma vie ("My Career, My Life", 1980) and « Un long cri dans la nuit: Cinq Années à l'Asile » ("A Long Cry in the Night: Five Years in the Asylum", 1990).
Revised: Robitaille has published two autobiographies: Ma carrière, ma vie ("My Career, My Life", 1980) and « Un long cri dans la nuit: Cinq Années à l'Asile ("A Long Cry in the Night: Five Years in the Asylum", 1990).
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Original:  Starting 14 July 1958, when they moved into the "Red House" at  4 Church Lane, Neem Karoli resided with Mukerjee and his wife Kamala (or Didi, elder sister) during the winters.
Revised:  Starting 14 July 1958, when they moved into the "Red House" at No. 4 Church Lane, Neem Karoli resided with Mukerjee and his wife Kamala (or Didi, elder sister) during the winters.
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Original:  six of them were beheaded by the Japanese on Buna URL Another source says Tapiedi was “axed to death by the natives after he had returned to retrieve the station records box and some money.”
Revised:  six of them were beheaded by the Japanese on Buna beach. Another source says Tapiedi was “axed to death by the natives after he had returned to retrieve the station records box and some money.”
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Original:  Another church taking Lucian Tapiedi as its patronal saint is St Lucian's Six URL in the Six Mile Settlement of Port Moresby, north of Jacksons International Airport.
Revised:  Another church taking Lucian Tapiedi as its patronal saint is St Lucian's Six Mile in the Six Mile Settlement of Port Moresby, north of Jacksons International Airport.
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Original: ]] Lucian Tapiedi ( b. ca. 1921— 1942) was a Papuan Anglican teacher who was one of the "New Guinea Martyrs."
Revised: ]] Lucian Tapiedi ( – 1942) was a Papuan Anglican teacher who was one of the "New Guinea Martyrs."
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Original:  Veneration The Martyrs of New Guinea are honored with memorial and feast days on many church calendars of the Anglican Communion. See also
Revised:  Veneration The Martyrs of New Guinea are honored with memorial and feast days on many church calendars of the Anglican Communion. 
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Original: In his book,on China, Kissinger claims that China, in its ancient history, never campaigned for foreign domination, and that the Chinese did not seek to export Chinese values ​​to the world and dominate other regions because of their Confucian culture, unlike the United States.
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Original: Early life and education Kissinger was born Heinz Alfred Kissinger  in Fürth, Bavaria , Germany , in 1923 to a German-Jewish family.
Revised: Early life and education Heinz Alfred Kissinger in Fürth, Bavaria , Germany , in 1923 to a German-Jewish family.
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Original: Early life and education Kissinger was born Heinz Alfred Kissinger  in Fürth, Bavaria , Germany , in 1923 to a German-Jewish family.
Revised: Early life and education Kissinger was born Heinz Alfred Kissinger was born in Fürth, Bavaria , Germany , in 1923 to a German-Jewish family.
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Original: Early life and education Kissinger was born Heinz Alfred Kissinger  in Fürth, Bavaria , Germany , in 1923 to a German-Jewish family.
Revised: Early life and education Kissinger was born Heinz Alfred Kissinger in Fürth, Bavaria , in 1923 to a German-Jewish family.
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Original:  May 27, 1923) is an American politician, diplomat, and geopolitical consultant who served as 56th United States Secretary of State and 8th National Security Advisor under the presidential administrations of Richard Nixon and Gerald Ford.
Revised:  May 27, 1923) is an American politician, diplomat, and geopolitical consultant who served as United States Secretary of State and 8th National Security Advisor under the presidential administrations of Richard Nixon and Gerald Ford.
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