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Original:  The march will start at 1:30 pm from Hyde Park (Piccadilly side) forward Piccadilly Circus, then to Trafalgar Square, Whitehall and Downing Street.
Revised:  The march will start at 1:30 pm from Hyde Park (Piccadilly side) toward Piccadilly Circus, then to Trafalgar Square, Whitehall and Downing Street.
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Original:  Even due to the pre-announced protests, the British Government has expected to spend for public safety and public policy in general more than w:Pound sterling £12 million  €14 million).
Revised:  The British Government is expected to spend for public safety and public policy in general more than w:Pound sterling £12 million €14 million).
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Original:  Even due to the pre-announced protests, the British Government has expected to spend for public safety and public policy in general more than w:Pound sterling £12 million  €14 million).
Revised:  Even due to the pre-announced protests, the British Government has expected to spend for public safety and public policy in general more than £12 million €14 million).
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Original:  Even due to the pre-announced protests, the British Government has expected to spend for public safety and public policy in general more than w:Pound sterling £12 million  €14 million).
Revised:  Even due to the pre-announced protests, the British Government has expected to spend for public safety and public policy in general more than w:Pound sterling £12 million ( €14 million).
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Original:  He was 80. Rehnquist died surrounded by friends and family in his Arlington, Virginia home.
Revised:  He was 80. Rehnquist died surrounded by friends and family in his , home.
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Original:  The first vacancy occurred when Associate Justice Sandra Day O'Connor announced her retirement on July 1, 2005, though O'Connor will remain in office until her successor has been appointed.
Revised:  The first vacancy occurred when announced her retirement on July 1, 2005, though O'Connor will remain in office until her successor has been appointed.
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Original:  File:Wikinews-original-report.svg|Find Wikinews original stories here!
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Original:  |sidebar= However, Rauf has denied that he struck a deal with the pastor, saying that he was surprised by the announcement of a deal. -Read more In briefing- Briefs from Wikinews stories Tea Party-endorsed Christine O'Donnell wins Delaware Senate primary election- Tea Party endorsed Christine O'Donnell won the Deleware Senate primaries is an upset win against incumbent Mike Castle by 30,561 votes to 27,021, 53.1\% to 46.9\%.
Revised:  |sidebar= However, Rauf has denied that he struck a deal with the pastor, saying that he was surprised by the announcement of a deal. -Read In briefing- Briefs from Wikinews stories Tea Party-endorsed Christine O'Donnell wins Delaware Senate primary election- Tea Party endorsed Christine O'Donnell won the Deleware Senate primaries is an upset win against incumbent Mike Castle by 30,561 votes to 27,021, 53.1\% to 46.9\%.
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Original:  |sidebar= However, Rauf has denied that he struck a deal with the pastor, saying that he was surprised by the announcement of a deal. -Read more In briefing- Briefs from Wikinews stories Tea Party-endorsed Christine O'Donnell wins Delaware Senate primary election- Tea Party endorsed Christine O'Donnell won the Deleware Senate primaries is an upset win against incumbent Mike Castle by 30,561 votes to 27,021, 53.1\% to 46.9\%.
Revised:  |sidebar= However, Rauf has denied that he struck a deal with the pastor, saying that he was surprised by the announcement of a deal. -Read more moreIn briefing- Briefs from Wikinews stories Tea Party-endorsed Christine O'Donnell wins Delaware Senate primary election- Tea Party endorsed Christine O'Donnell won the Deleware Senate primaries is an upset win against incumbent Mike Castle by 30,561 votes to 27,021, 53.1\% to 46.9\%.
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Original:  |sidebar= However, Rauf has denied that he struck a deal with the pastor, saying that he was surprised by the announcement of a deal. -Read more In briefing- Briefs from Wikinews stories Tea Party-endorsed Christine O'Donnell wins Delaware Senate primary election- Tea Party endorsed Christine O'Donnell won the Deleware Senate primaries is an upset win against incumbent Mike Castle by 30,561 votes to 27,021, 53.1\% to 46.9\%.
Revised:  |sidebar= However, Rauf has denied that he struck a deal with the pastor, saying that he was surprised by the announcement of a deal. -Read more In briefing- Briefs from Wikinews storiesTea Party-endorsed Christine O'Donnell wins Delaware Senate primary election- Tea Party endorsed Christine O'Donnell won the Deleware Senate primaries is an upset win against incumbent Mike Castle by 30,561 votes to 27,021, 53.1\% to 46.9\%.
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Original:  Headless man found near suburban Chicago school- A headless man was found in Evanston, Illinois with a pipe bomb near him on September 14.
Revised:  Headless man found near suburban Chicago school'''- A headless man was found in Evanston, Illinois with a pipe bomb near him on September 14.
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Original: The Club steering lock installed in a car The inventor The Club steering lock James E. Winner  Jr. has died at the age of 81.
Revised: The Club steering lock installed in a car The inventor The Club steering lock James E. Winner , Jr. has died at the age of 81.
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Original: The Club steering lock installed in a car The inventor The Club steering lock James E. Winner  Jr. has died at the age of 81.
Revised: The Club steering lock installed in a car The inventor The Club steering lock James E. Winner Jr. has died aged 81.
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Original:  Winner was killed after he was involved in a car accident in Clarion County.
Revised:  Winner was in a car accident in Clarion County.
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Original:  Two other people were killed in the accident.
Revised:  Two others died in the accident.
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Original:  It has been reported by authorities that the accident happened when Winner drove his Sports Utility Vehicle into oncoming traffic.
Revised:  Authorities say the accident occurred when Winner drove his Sports Utility Vehicle into oncoming traffic.
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Original:  It has been reported by authorities that the accident happened when Winner drove his Sports Utility Vehicle into oncoming traffic.
Revised:  It has been reported by authorities that the accident happened when Winner drove his SUV into oncoming traffic.
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Original:  Winner created The Club steering lock in the early 80’s after his car was stolen.
Revised:  Winner created The Club steering lock in the early 80s after his car was stolen.
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Original:  He came up with the idea while fighting in the Korean War , he had secured his vehicle with metal chains to stop anybody taking it.
Revised:  He came up with the idea while fighting in the Korean War ; he secured his vehicle with metal chains to stop anybody taking it.
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Original:  He was quoted saying “ If they can’t steer, they can’t steal ”.
Revised:  He said, " If they can’t steer, they can’t steal ”.
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Original:  He was quoted saying “ If they can’t steer, they can’t steal ”.
Revised:  He was quoted saying “ If they can’t steer, they can’t steal ."
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Original:  He sold the first one in Pennsylvania but later founded Winner International threw which he sold over 10 million .
Revised:  He sold the first Club in Pennsylvania and later founded Winner International threw which he sold over 10 million .
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Original:  As well as The Club Winner also owned hotels and businesses and also ran his own steel company .
Revised:  As well as The Club Winner also owned hotels , a steel company, and other companies .
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Original:  A spokesman for Winner International released a statementsaying it was "  a very difficult time for all of us and the family would request that you honor their privacy.
Revised:  A spokesman for Winner International said in a statement, " a very difficult time for all of us and the family would request that you honor their privacy.
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Original:  A spokesman for Winner International released a statementsaying it was "  a very difficult time for all of us and the family would request that you honor their privacy.
Revised:  A spokesman for Winner International released a statementsaying it was " this is a very difficult time for all of us and the family would request that you honor their privacy.
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Original:  Winner was in a  car accident in Clarion County  .
Revised:  Winner was in a car accident in Clarion County , Pennsylvania .
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Original: The Club steering lock installed in a car  The inventor of The Club steering lock James E. Winner, Jr. has died in a head-on car accident in Clarion County, Pennsylvania aged 81 today.
Revised: The Club steering lock installed in a car . The inventor of The Club steering lock James E. Winner, Jr. has died in a head-on car accident in Clarion County, Pennsylvania aged 81 today.
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Original:  Philips says the forces were searching for top al-Qaeda official ;
Revised:  Philips says the forces were searching for top al-Qaeda official .
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Original:   Baltimore area police said " that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the unidentified gunman, believed to still be holed up on the eighth floor.
Revised:  Earlier, Baltimore area police said " that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the unidentified gunman, believed to still be holed up on the eighth floor.
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Original:   Baltimore area police said " that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the unidentified gunman, believed to still be holed up on the eighth floor.
Revised:  Baltimore area police said that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the unidentified gunman, believed to still be holed up on the eighth floor.
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Original:   Baltimore area police said " that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the unidentified gunman, believed to still be holed up on the eighth floor.
Revised:  Baltimore area police said " that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the unidentified gunman, who was holed up on the eighth floor.
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Original:  After a standoff lasting for several hours, law enforcement officers shot and killed the gunman.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) said that it had been assisting local police in the incident
Revised:  After a standoff lasting for three hours, law enforcement officers in a SWAT team shot and killed the gunman
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Original:  Baltimore police shot and killed the suspected shooter, who had been barricaded inside his mother's hospital room for several hours  . Earlier, Baltimore area police said that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the unidentified gunman, who was holed up on the eighth floor.
Revised:  Baltimore police found the suspected shooter, who had been barricaded inside his mother's hospital room for several hours . Earlier, Baltimore area police said that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the unidentified gunman, who was holed up on the eighth floor.
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Original:  Baltimore police shot and killed the suspected shooter, who had been barricaded inside his mother's hospital room for several hours  . Earlier, Baltimore area police said that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the unidentified gunman, who was holed up on the eighth floor.
Revised:  Baltimore police shot and killed the suspected shooter, who had been barricaded inside his mother's hospital room for several hours . Earlier, Baltimore area police said that they were "in the process of a tactical operation" to capture the gunman, who was holed up on the eighth floor.
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Original: An unidentified man shot a faculty physician as well as his own mother before killing himself at Johns Hopkins Hospital in Baltimore, Maryland.
Revised: An man shot a faculty physician as well as his own mother before killing himself at Johns Hopkins Hospital in Baltimore, Maryland.
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Original:  Earlier, a police report said that the gunman had been shot and killed by members of a SWAT team, but then called that account an error
Revised:  Police had previously said that the gunman had been shot and killed by members of a SWAT team, but then called that account an error
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Original:  Earlier, a police report said that the gunman had been shot and killed by members of a SWAT team, but then called that account an error
Revised:  Earlier, a police report said that the gunman had been shot and killed by police, but police later said that that report was incorrect
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Original: The cause of the fire is not known, but occurred early Sunday morning in a 15-storey building "L'Hay-les-Roses" .
Revised: The cause of the fire is not known, but occurred early Sunday morning in a 15-storey building in the southern suburb of l'Haÿ-les-Roses .
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Original:  The flames were put out quickly, but several people died by inhaling the fumes  
Revised:  The flames were put out quickly, but several people died by inhaling the fumes . 
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Original: The cause of the fire is not known, but occurred early Sunday morning in a 15-storey building in the southern suburb of l'Haÿ-les-Roses.
Revised: The cause of the fire is not known, but occurred early Sunday morning in a 15-story building in the southern suburb of l'Haÿ-les-Roses.
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Original:  One woman was in labour and gave birth at the scene.
Revised:  One woman was in labor and gave birth at the scene.
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Original: The blaze reportedly originated somewhere in the entrance hall  .
Revised: The blaze reportedly originated in the entrance hall .
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Original:  Investigators think that the fire was criminal.
Revised:  Investigators say the fire was criminal.
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Original:  The cause of the fire is not known, but occurred early Sunday morning in a 15-story building in the southern suburb of l'Haÿ-les-Roses.
Revised:  The fire occurred early Sunday morning in a 15-story building in the southern suburb of l'Haÿ-les-Roses.
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Original:  Police yesterday announced that they have arrested four men over her death, suspecting that she fell from her balcony after she was either pushed after or jumped trying to escape being raped   
Revised:  Police yesterday announced that they have arrested four men over her death, suspecting that she fell from her balcony after she was either pushed after or jumped trying to escape being raped . 
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Original:  Following the death, around 300 fellow Algerian Muslim pilgrims closed down the road past the hotel in protest, seeking an audience with their ambassador and prosecutions for the suspected offences    
Revised:  Following the death, around 300 fellow Algerian Muslim pilgrims closed down the road past the hotel in protest, seeking an audience with their ambassador and prosecutions for the suspected offences . 
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Original:  Police yesterday announced that they have arrested four men over her death, suspecting that she fell from her balcony after she was either pushed after or jumped trying to escape being raped.
Revised:  Police yesterday announced that they have arrested four men over her death, suspecting that she fell from her balcony after she was either pushed or jumped trying to escape being raped.
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Original:  The service will become available to the rest of Europe "as soon as possible", stated Michael Sharon, Facebook Places' product manager.
Revised:  The service will become available to other parts of Europe "as soon as possible", stated Michael Sharon, Facebook Places' product manager.
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Original:  Some people explicitly let us know that they just want to share with a certain group so we changed the settings from the default for them – of course they can opt back in at a later time   .
Revised:  Some people explicitly let us know that they just want to share with a certain group so we changed the settings from the default for them – of course they can opt back in at a later time ." .
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Original:  Earlier this week, the service was also released in Japan  . Previously, some people in the UK who use the Facebookfor iPhone application discovered that they were able to use the service.
Revised:  The service was released in Japan . Previously, some people in the UK who use the Facebookfor iPhone application discovered that they were able to use the service.
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Original:  Earlier this week, the service was also released in Japan  . Previously, some people in the UK who use the Facebookfor iPhone application discovered that they were able to use the service.
Revised:  Earlier this week, the service was also released in Japan . Previously, some people in the UK who use Facebook's iPhone application discovered that they were able to use the service.
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Original:  Users of Facebook Places will be able to establish if any of their Facebook friends are or have been in the vicinity if they do decide to "check in".
Revised:  Users of Facebook Places will be able to establish if any of their Facebook "friends" are or have been in the vicinity if they do decide to "check in".
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Original:  Users of Facebook Places will be able to establish if any of their Facebook friends are or have been in the vicinity if they do decide to "check in".
Revised:  Users of Facebook Places will be able to establish if any of their Facebook friends are or have been in the vicinity if both decide to "check in".
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Original:  The service will become available to other parts of Europe "as soon as possible", stated Michael Sharon, Facebook Places' product manager.
Revised:  The service will become available to other parts of Europe "as soon as possible", stated Michael Sharon, Facebook Places' product manager.
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Original:  The airlines have also said that the low overlap and the low-cost competition will bring fares to heel  
Revised:  The airlines have also said that the low overlap and the low-cost competition will bring fares to heel . 
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Original: The airlines expect to complete the merger by October 1 of this year, and customers can expect to see major changes in spring 2011, when the new United will rebrand their kiosks, worker uniforms and planes .
Revised: The airlines expect to complete the merger by October 1 of this year, and customers can expect to see major changes in spring 2011, when the new United will rebrand their kiosks, worker uniforms and airplanes .
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Original:  Other people were less positive on the merger.
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Original:  Rick Seaney, CEO of FareCompare.com, has said that "losing a major competitor is likely to make prices rise — all things equal on the economy and fuel prices."
Revised:  Rick Seaney, CEO of FareCompare.com, said that "losing a major competitor is likely to make prices rise — all things equal on the economy and fuel prices."
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Original: ]] United Airlines and Continental Airlines shareholders approved Friday of a USD3.2 billion merger that would create the world's largest airline.
Revised: ]] United Airlines and Continental Airlines shareholders yesterday approved a US$3.2 billion merger that would create the world's largest airline.
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Original:  The merger will create the world's largest airline, surpassing rival Delta Air Lines, which merged only a year ago  .
Revised:  The new company surpasses rival Delta Air Lines, which merged only a year ago .
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Original:  "No further obstacles to the merger are likely at this point," Jim Corridore, Standard & Poor ’ s equity analyst, said to investors.
Revised:  "No further obstacles to the merger are likely at this point," Jim Corridore, Standard & Poor ' s equity analyst, said to investors.
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Original:  United and Continental have defended themselves against accusations of monopolizing the airline industry by stating that they compete with low-cost carriers such as Southwest Airlines on three-fourths of their US network.
Revised:  United and Continental have defended themselves against accusations of monopolizing the airline industry by stating that they compete with low-cost carriers such as Southwest Airlines on three quarters of their US network.
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Original:  The deal was approved in August by United States antitrust regulators.
Revised:  The deal was earlier approved by United States antitrust regulators.
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Original: File:Continental-United Merger.jpg|The new United logo.
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Original: Peter Whyatt , who is jointly leading the project to restore the mural , today told Wikinews he had a number of concerns about the possible success of the project.
Revised: Peter Whyatt , who is jointly leading the project to restore the mural . Today he told Wikinews he had a number of concerns about the possible success of the project.
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Original:  This is a big mural and it will be expensive to restore  . “But if the public and local voluntary organisations show their support, we can make it happen," said Mr Whyatt .
Revised:  This is a big mural and it will be expensive to restore . “But if the public and local voluntary organisations show their support, we can make it happen," Mr Whyatt concluded .
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Original:  The project aims to involve many local people : volunteers would learn new conservation skills , workshops with local children to involve them in their heritage, an exhibition by local artists, guided tours and a celebratory event at the end of the restoration project.
Revised:  The project hopes to involve many local people : volunteers would learn new conservation skills , workshops with local children to involve them in their heritage, an exhibition by local artists, guided tours and a celebratory event at the end of the restoration project.
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Original:  The project aims to involve many local people : volunteers would learn new conservation skills , workshops with local children to involve them in their heritage, an exhibition by local artists, guided tours and a celebratory event at the end of the restoration project.
Revised:  The project aims to involve many local people who could learn new conservation skills , workshops with local children to involve them in their heritage, an exhibition by local artists, guided tours and a celebratory event at the end of the restoration project.
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Original:  The project aims to involve many local people : volunteers would learn new conservation skills , workshops with local children to involve them in their heritage, an exhibition by local artists, guided tours and a celebratory event at the end of the restoration project.
Revised:  The project aims to involve many local people : volunteers would learn new conservation skills . Also planned are workshops with local children to involve them in their heritage, an exhibition by local artists, guided tours and a celebratory event at the end of the restoration project.
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Original:  In addition to this, a booklet would be produced containing collected oral histories of the people involved and a preservation trust to preserve the mural .
Revised:  In addition to this, a booklet would be produced containing collected oral histories of the people involved and a preservation trust to protect the mural in future years .
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