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Original:  Though a great earthquake could  occur in any place of Japantheoretically and scientists warned the possiblity of earthquake in Kobe, citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware of this possibility 10 years ago.
Revised:  Though a great earthquake could theoretically occur in any place of Japantheoretically and scientists warned the possiblity of earthquake in Kobe, citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware of this possibility 10 years ago.
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Original:  Though a great earthquake could  occur in any place of Japantheoretically and scientists warned the possiblity of earthquake in Kobe, citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware of this possibility 10 years ago.
Revised:  Though a great earthquake could occur in any part of Japan, and scientists had warned of the possiblity of earthquake in Kobe, citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware of this possibility 10 years ago.
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Original:  Though a great earthquake could  occur in any place of Japantheoretically and scientists warned the possiblity of earthquake in Kobe, citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware of this possibility 10 years ago.
Revised:  Though a great earthquake could occur in any place of Japantheoretically and scientists warned the possiblity of earthquakes in Kobe, citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware of this possibility 10 years ago.
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Original:  Number of victims and destructions caused by the earthquake gave a serious shock  the people.
Revised:  The death and destruction caused by the earthquake gave a serious shock the people.
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Original:  Number of victims and destructions caused by the earthquake gave a serious shock  the people.
Revised:  Number of victims and destructions caused by the quake gave a serious shock the people.
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Original:  A story of Kobe city hall was totally crashed , and a part of Meishin Highway, a highway between Nagoya and Kobe was destroyed and twisted and a bus failed to fall from the broken highway.
Revised:  A story of Kobe city hall was totally destroyed , and a part of Meishin Highway, a highway between Nagoya and Kobe was destroyed and twisted and a bus failed to fall from the broken highway.
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Original:  A story of Kobe city hall was totally crashed , and a part of Meishin Highway, a highway between Nagoya and Kobe was destroyed and twisted and a bus failed to fall from the broken highway.
Revised:  A story of Kobe city hall was totally crashed , and a part of Meishin Highway, a highway between Nagoya and Kobe , was ripped apart, and a bus barely avoided falling from the broken highway.
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Original:  Engeneers and the Japanese government closed up vulnerability of city structure in Japan after the earthquake.
Revised:  Engineers and the Japanese government closed up vulnerability of city structure in Japan after the earthquake.
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Original:  The earthquake occured in Awaji Island, near the city of Kobe.
Revised:  The earthquake centered around Awaji Island, near the city of Kobe.
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Original:  It was measured 7.3 on the Richter Scale, and the biggest to hit Japan since World War II.
Revised:  It measured 7.3 on the Richter Scale, and the biggest to hit Japan since World War II.
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Original:  It was measured 7.3 on the Richter Scale, and the biggest to hit Japan since World War II.
Revised:  It was measured 7.3 on the Richter Scale, the biggest quake to hit Japan since World War II.
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Original:  Though a great earthquake could theoretically occur in any part of Japan, and scientists had warned of the possiblity of earthquakes in Kansai resion , citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware of this possibility 10 years ago.
Revised:  Though a great earthquake could theoretically occur in any part of Japan, and scientists had warned of the possiblity of earthquakes in the Kansai region , citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware of this possibility 10 years ago.
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Original:  One story of the Kobe city hall was totally destroyed, and a part of Meishin Highway , a highway between Nagoya and Kobe , was ripped apart , and a bus barely avoided falling from the broken highway.
Revised:  One story of the Kobe city hall was totally destroyed, and a part of Meishin Highway between Nagoya and Kobe , was ripped apart , and a bus barely avoided falling from the broken highway.
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Original:  One story of the Kobe city hall was totally destroyed, and a part of Meishin Highway , a highway between Nagoya and Kobe , was ripped apart , and a bus barely avoided falling from the broken highway.
Revised:  One story of the Kobe city hall was totally destroyed, and a part of Meishin Highway , a highway between Nagoya and Kobe was ripped apart , and a bus barely avoided falling from the broken highway.
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Original:  One story of the Kobe city hall was totally destroyed, and a part of Meishin Highway , a highway between Nagoya and Kobe , was ripped apart , and a bus barely avoided falling from the broken highway.
Revised:  One story of the Kobe city hall was totally destroyed, and a part of Meishin Highway , a highway between Nagoya and Kobe , was ripped apart ; a bus barely avoided falling from the broken highway.
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Original:  Engineers and the Japanese government closed up vulnerability of city structure in Japan after the earthquake.
Revised:  Engineers buttressed vulnerable city structures throughout Japan after the earthquake.
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Original:  Researchs revealed the architecture designed following the standard had survived the earthquake.
Revised:  Research revealed that architecture designed under national earthquake-proof standards had survived the earthquake.
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Original:  Many old architectures were rebuilt, reconstructed  or given structual support not in Kansai region but in other regions.
Revised:  Many old buildings were rebuilt, reconstructed or given structual support not in Kansai region but in other regions.
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Original:  Many old architectures were rebuilt, reconstructed  or given structual support not in Kansai region but in other regions.
Revised:  Many old architectures were rebuilt, reconstructed , or given structual support not in Kansai region but in other regions.
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Original:  Vulnerability of city infrastructure was also noticed ;
Revised:  Vulnerability of city infrastructure was also attended to ;
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Original:  It came from the vulnerability of design of such infrastructure and many municipalities reviewed their standard for civil engenerring design.
Revised:  It came from the vulnerability of design of such infrastructure and many municipalities reviewed their standards for civil engineering design.
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Original:  The earthquake revealed also the systematic vulnerability within the Japanese government.
Revised:  The earthquake also revealed systematic vulnerability within the Japanese government.
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Original:  The prime minister Tomiichi Murayama at that time knew the earthquake first from a newsshow of TV eventually, not from the govermental report, though wwo hours passed already from the first earthquake.
Revised:  The prime minister at that time knew the earthquake first from a newsshow of TV eventually, not from the govermental report, though wwo hours passed already from the first earthquake.
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Original:  The prime minister Tomiichi Murayama at that time knew the earthquake first from a newsshow of TV eventually, not from the govermental report, though wwo hours passed already from the first earthquake.
Revised:  The prime minister Tomiichi Murayama at that time , Tomiichi Murayama, first learned of the earthquake from the govermental report, though wwo hours passed already from the first earthquake.
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Original:   The government improved these situations , and in the case of the Chuetsu Earthquake in October the hall of prime ministercould deal with the accident much fast . After the earthquake  many people spent days in shelters.
Revised:  The government improved these weaknesses , and in the case of the Chuetsu Earthquake in October the hall of prime ministercould deal with the accident much fast . After the earthquake many people spent days in shelters.
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Original:   The government improved these situations , and in the case of the Chuetsu Earthquake in October the hall of prime ministercould deal with the accident much fast . After the earthquake  many people spent days in shelters.
Revised:  The government improved these situations , and in the case of the Chuetsu Earthquake in October the hall of prime ministercould deal with the accident . After the earthquake many people spent days in shelters.
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Original:   The government improved these situations , and in the case of the Chuetsu Earthquake in October the hall of prime ministercould deal with the accident much fast . After the earthquake  many people spent days in shelters.
Revised:  The government improved these situations , and in the case of the Chuetsu Earthquake in October the hall of prime ministercould deal with the accident much fast . After the earthquake , many people spent days in shelters.
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Original:   Hyogo prefecture and municipalities provided temporary house so-called Kasetsujutaku as shelters . Such temporary house had remained since 2000.
Revised:  The Hyogo prefecture and municipalities provided temporary house so-called Kasetsujutaku as shelters . Such temporary house had remained since 2000.
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Original:   Hyogo prefecture and municipalities provided temporary house so-called Kasetsujutaku as shelters . Such temporary house had remained since 2000.
Revised:  Hyogo prefecture and municipalities provided temporary shelters, called Kasetsujutaku . Such temporary house had remained since 2000.
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Original:   Hyogo prefecture and municipalities provided temporary house so-called Kasetsujutaku as shelters . Such temporary house had remained since 2000.
Revised:  Hyogo prefecture and municipalities provided temporary house so-called Kasetsujutaku as shelters . Such temporary houses had remained since 2000.
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Original:  Since those houses were provided to individuals  not to communities, many people found they were no more with their familiar neighbors after moving.
Revised:  Since those houses were provided to individuals and not to communities, many people found they were no more with their familiar neighbors after moving.
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Original:  Since those houses were provided to individuals  not to communities, many people found they were no more with their familiar neighbors after moving.
Revised:  Since those houses were provided to individuals not to communities, many people found they were no longer with their familiar neighbors after moving.
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Original:  It causes serious problems among people, specially old aged ones.
Revised:  This caused serious problems among people, specially old aged ones.
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Original:  Since 200 , around 200 people died alone and was found after a while of their death in such a temporary house and it was considered a serious social problem with a coinaged word Kodokushi (meaning "death in solitude" in Japanese), but many people think no effective solution was given.
Revised:  Since 200 , around 200 people died alone and was found after a while of their death in such a temporary house and it was considered a serious social problem . A word was even coined for this situation, Kodokushi (meaning "death in solitude" in Japanese), but many people think no effective solution was given.
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Original:  Since 200 , around 200 people died alone and was found after a while of their death in such a temporary house and it was considered a serious social problem with a coinaged word Kodokushi (meaning "death in solitude" in Japanese), but many people think no effective solution was given.
Revised:  Since 200 , around 200 people died alone and was found after a while of their death in such a temporary house and it was considered a serious social problem with a coinaged word Kodokushi (meaning "death in solitude" in Japanese), but some say no effective solution was given.
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Original: The earthquake had also a bright side.
Revised: The earthquake has also had a bright side.
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Original:  Before the earthquake  it was not popular to participate  in social activities voluntarily in Japan.
Revised:  Before the earthquake , it was not popular to participate in social activities voluntarily in Japan.
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Original:  Before the earthquake  it was not popular to participate  in social activities voluntarily in Japan.
Revised:  Before the earthquake it was not popular to participate in social activities in Japan.
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Original:  Since it was close to the end of schoolyear in Japan , many students could stay in the suffered area for a long days.
Revised:  Since it was close to the end of the Japanese schoolyear , many students could stay in the suffered area for a long days.
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Original:  Since it was close to the end of schoolyear in Japan , many students could stay in the suffered area for a long days.
Revised:  Since it was close to the end of schoolyear in Japan , many students could stay in the affected area for long days.
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Original:  And it has been not easy to have a vacation for Japanese workers, not a small number of people took vacations from their company and went to the suffered area .
Revised:  And it has been not easy to have a vacation for Japanese workers, as many people took vacations from their company and went to the suffered area .
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Original:  Vulnerabile city infrastructure was also attended to;
Revised:  Vulnerable city infrastructure was also attended to;
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Original:  The prime minister at that time, Tomiichi Murayama, first learned of the earthquake from a TV news program two hours later, and not kobe sm,ellllllllssssssss bad He called his secretary, who also knew nothing of it.
Revised:  The prime minister at that time, Tomiichi Murayama, first learned of the earthquake from a TV news program two hours later, and not from a goverment report. He called his secretary, who also knew nothing of it.
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Original: January 17, 2005. lfkldkgldkglkfdlgdlfkgedl5tkghl7i96hp8kjp fp hkpfdhdh fdh fdhf Headline text li The earthquake  centered around Awaji Island, near the city of Kobe.
Revised: January 17, 2005. lfkldkgldkglkfdlgdlfkgedl5tkghl7i96hp8kjp fp hkpfdhdh fdh fdhf Headline text li The earthquake The earthquake centered around Awaji Island, near the city of Kobe.
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Original:  It measured 7.3 onsahjmhm rmjyikuiujmhgnmh# mjtp0%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% # ~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ~ FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
Revised:  It measured 7.3 mjtp0%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% # ~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ~ FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
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Original:  It measured 7.3 onsahjmhm rmjyikuiujmhgnmh# mjtp0%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% # ~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ~ FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
Revised:  It measured 7.3 onsahjmhm rmjyikuiujmhgnmh# %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% # ~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ~ FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
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Original:  It measured 7.3 onsahjmhm rmjyikuiujmhgnmh# mjtp0%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% # ~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ~ FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
Revised:  It measured 7.3 onsahjmhm rmjyikuiujmhgnmh# mjtp0%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ~ FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
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Original:  It measured 7.3 onsahjmhm rmjyikuiujmhgnmh# mjtp0%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% # ~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ~ FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
Revised:  It measured 7.3 onsahjmhm rmjyikuiujmhgnmh# mjtp0%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% # %DIFDELCMD < [%%% ~ FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
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Original:  It measured 7.3 onsahjmhm rmjyikuiujmhgnmh# mjtp0%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% # ~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ~ FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
Revised:  It measured 7.3 onsahjmhm rmjyikuiujmhgnmh# mjtp0%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% # ~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% FP/lij#%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'pk~';
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Original:  ';'b9o~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% -~ Pgl'/po~ potl.k;p lisa is in love yjugyikykumhgmjh nmhy6liuh the Richter Scale, the biggest quake to hit Japan since World War II.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% -~ Pgl'/po~ potl.k;p lisa is in love yjugyikykumhgmjh nmhy6liuh the Richter Scale, the biggest quake to hit Japan since World War II.
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Original:  ';'b9o~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% -~ Pgl'/po~ potl.k;p lisa is in love yjugyikykumhgmjh nmhy6liuh the Richter Scale, the biggest quake to hit Japan since World War II.
Revised:  ';'b9o~%DIFDELCMD < [%%% potl.k;p lisa is in love yjugyikykumhgmjh nmhy6liuh the Richter Scale, the biggest quake to hit Japan since World War II.
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Original:  Though a great earthquake could theoretically occur in any part of Japan, and scientists had warned of the possiblity of earthquakes in the Kansai region, citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware sarah is sooooooooo stupid and she thinks she is a rebel abd she fanci sum1 called ian this possibility 10 years ago.
Revised:  Though a great earthquake could theoretically occur in any part of Japan, and scientists had warned of the possiblity of earthquakes in the Kansai region, citizens and local goverment tended to be unaware of this possibility 10 years ago.
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Original: The FAA has allowed for commercial spaceflight operations  out of the  spaceport in Burns Flat, Oklahoma.
Revised: The FAA has issued a license for commercial spaceflight operations out of the spaceport in Burns Flat, Oklahoma.
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Original:  Testing at the spacesport is expected to begin sometime next year   
Revised:  Testing at the spacesport is expected to begin sometime next year . 
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Original:  Rocketplan Kistler plans on a "fairly extensive flight test program" in 2007 and commercial flights by 2008 
Revised:  Rocketplan Kistler plans on a "fairly extensive flight test program" in 2007 and commercial flights by 2008. 
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Original:  Testing at the w: spacesport is expected to begin sometime next year.
Revised:  Testing at the spacesport is expected to begin sometime next year.
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Original: Other United States spacesports include California Spaceport, Mojave Airport (California), Kodiak Launch Complex (Alaska), Spaceport Florida, and Virginia Spaceport.
Revised: Other United States spaceports include California Spaceport, Mojave Airport (California), Kodiak Launch Complex (Alaska), Spaceport Florida, and Virginia Spaceport.
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Original:  A Texas-based company has also expressed interest in the Oklahoma Spaceport.
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Original:  Dallas needs to win two more games and Miami needs to win three more games to become the 2006 NBA champions . Related storie
Revised:  Dallas needs to win two more games and Miami needs to win three more games to become the 2006 NBA champions Related storie
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Original:  Dallas needs to win two more games and Miami needs to win three more games to become the 2006 NBA champions . Related storie
Revised:  Dallas needs to win two more games and Miami needs to win three more games to become the 2006 NBA champions . 
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Original:  since 1931, also known as the "Puerto Rico Conference " a conference of the UCC, voted by a 3-1 margin to withdraw its affiliation with the UCC as a body, over discomfort about the UCC’s stance on lesbian, gay, bisexual and transgender issues. . This  means most of the 68 previously affiliated congregations will become independent, although denominational officials expressed hope that several might continue affiliation, through other conferences or special arrangements.
Revised:  also known as the "Puerto Rico Conference " a conference of the UCC, voted by a 3-1 margin to withdraw its affiliation with the UCC as a body, over discomfort about the UCC’s stance on lesbian, gay, bisexual and transgender issues. . This means most of the 68 previously affiliated congregations will become independent, although denominational officials expressed hope that several might continue affiliation, through other conferences or special arrangements.
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Original:  since 1931, also known as the "Puerto Rico Conference " a conference of the UCC, voted by a 3-1 margin to withdraw its affiliation with the UCC as a body, over discomfort about the UCC’s stance on lesbian, gay, bisexual and transgender issues. . This  means most of the 68 previously affiliated congregations will become independent, although denominational officials expressed hope that several might continue affiliation, through other conferences or special arrangements.
Revised:  since 1931, also known as the "Puerto Rico Conference " a conference of the UCC, voted by a 3-1 margin to withdraw its affiliation with the UCC as a body, over discomfort about the UCC’s stance on lesbian, gay, bisexual and transgender issues. . This This vote to disaffiliate means most of the 68 previously affiliated congregations will become independent, although denominational officials expressed hope that several might continue affiliation, through other conferences or special arrangements.
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Original:  This will be N. Korea's first long-range test sicne the nation imposed a "moratorium" in 1999.
Revised:  This will be N. Korea's first long-range test since the nation imposed a "moratorium" in 1999.
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Original: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is preparing to test an ICBM, the new Taepodong 2 missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles which could reach the United States mianland .
Revised: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is preparing to test an ICBM, the new Taepodong 2 missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles which could reach the United States mainland .
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Original: CNN quoted an anonymous U.S. intelligance official as saying, "[N. Korea] is doing everything you would expect if you are going to launch a missile.
Revised: CNN quoted an anonymous U.S. intelligence official as saying, "[N. Korea] is doing everything you would expect if you are going to launch a missile.
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Original: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is preparing to test an ICBM , the new Taepodong 2  missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles which  could reach the United States mainland.
Revised: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is prepared to test an ICBM , the new Taepodong 2 missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles which could reach the United States mainland.
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Original: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is preparing to test an ICBM , the new Taepodong 2  missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles which  could reach the United States mainland.
Revised: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is preparing to test an ICBM called Taepodong 2 missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles which could reach the United States mainland.
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Original: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is preparing to test an ICBM , the new Taepodong 2  missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles which  could reach the United States mainland.
Revised: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is preparing to test an ICBM , the new Taepodong 2 , a missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles which could reach the United States mainland.
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