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Original:  There are Nine of these: Andaman and Nicobar Islands, Chandigarh, Dadra and Nagar Haveli , Daman and Diu, Delhi, Jammu and Kashmir, Ladakh, Lakshadweep and Puducherry.
Revised:  There are Nine of these: Andaman and Nicobar Islands, Chandigarh, Dadra and Nagar Haveli and Daman and Diu, Delhi, Jammu and Kashmir, Ladakh, Lakshadweep and Puducherry.
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Original: A federal territory is an area under the direct and usually exclusive jurisdiction of a federation's central  or national government.
Revised: A federal territory is a governmental entity subject to the direct (and in many instances, exclusive) jurisdiction of a federation's central or national government.
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Original: A federal territory is an area under the direct and usually exclusive jurisdiction of a federation's central  or national government.
Revised: A federal territory is an area under the direct and usually exclusive jurisdiction of a federation's central and/ or national government.
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Original:  The federated states constitute the federation itself  and share sovereignty with the federal government , while a territory does not have sovereign status .
Revised:  The federated states constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government , while a territory does not have sovereign status .
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Original:  The federated states constitute the federation itself  and share sovereignty with the federal government , while a territory does not have sovereign status .
Revised:  The federated states constitute the federation itself and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status
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Original:  Unlike a federal district,  a territory may have some degree of self-rule , but the terms are used somewhat differently in different federations.
Revised:  In contrast to a federal district, a territory may have some degree of self-rule , but the terms are used somewhat differently in different federations.
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Original:  Unlike a federal district,  a territory may have some degree of self-rule , but the terms are used somewhat differently in different federations.
Revised:  Unlike a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule , but the terms are used somewhat differently in different federations.
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Original:  Unlike a federal district,  a territory may have some degree of self-rule , but the terms are used somewhat differently in different federations.
Revised:  Unlike a federal district, a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations.)
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Original: A federal territory is a governmental entity subject to the direct (and in many instances, exclusive ) jurisdiction of a federation's central and/ or national government.
Revised: A federal territory is an area under the direct and usually exclusive jurisdiction of a federation's central and/ or national government.
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Original: A federal territory is a governmental entity subject to the direct (and in many instances, exclusive ) jurisdiction of a federation's central and/ or national government.
Revised: A federal territory is a governmental entity subject to the direct (and in many instances, exclusive ) jurisdiction of a federation's central or national government.
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Original:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
Revised:  A federal territory is an area that is part of a federation but not part of any federated state. The federated states constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
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Original:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
Revised:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
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Original:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
Revised:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government , while a territory does not have sovereign status. In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
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Original:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
Revised:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status Unlike a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
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Original:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
Revised:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
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Original:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule . (However, the respective uses of such terms differ somewhat among various federations. )
Revised:  Such an entity’s territory constitutes part of the federation , though not , per se, of any of the federated states that collectively constitute the federation itself , and share sovereignty with the federal government . Conversely, a territory lacks any sovereign status In contrast to a federal district, such a territory may have some degree of self-rule , but the terms are used somewhat differently in different federations.
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Original: Federal territories include: Federal Capital Territory (Nigeria) Kuala Lumpur, Putrajaya and Labuan (Malaysia) Australian Capital Territory, Jervis Bay Territory and Northern Territory (Australia) Northwest Territories, Nunavut and Yukon (Canada) In India, the federal territories are formally called union territories.
Revised: Federal territories include: Australian Capital Territory, Jervis Bay Territory and Northern Territory (Australia) Northwest Territories, Nunavut and Yukon (Canada) In India, the federal territories are formally called union territories.
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Original:  There are eight of these: Andaman and Nicobar Islands, Chandigarh, Dadra and Nagar Haveli and Daman and Diu, Delhi, Jammu and Kashmir, Ladakh, Lakshadweep and Puducherry .
Revised:  There are eight of these: Andaman and Nicobar Islands, Chandigarh, Dadra and Nagar Haveli and Daman and Diu, Delhi, Jammu and Kashmir, Ladakh, Lakshadweep and Puducherry 
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Original:  In Pakistan, the federal territories are Islamabad Capital Territory .
Revised:  In Pakistan, the federal territories are Islamabad Capital Territory (Pakistan)
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Original: A federal territory is an  area under the direct and usually exclusive jurisdiction of a federation's central or national government.
Revised: A federal territory is an administrative area under the direct and usually exclusive jurisdiction of a federation's central or national government.
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Original: A federal territory is an  area under the direct and usually exclusive jurisdiction of a federation's central or national government.
Revised: A federal territory is an area under the direct and usually exclusive jurisdiction of a federation's national government.
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Original:  A federal territory is an area that is part of a federation  but not part of any federated state.
Revised:  A federal territory is part of a federation but not part of any federated state.
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Original:  A federal territory is an area that is part of a federation  but not part of any federated state.
Revised:  A federal territory is an area that is part of a federation , but not part of any federated state.
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Original:  The federated states constitute the federation itself and share sovereignty with the federal government, while a territory does not have sovereign status  .
Revised:  The states constitute the federation itself and share sovereignty with the federal government, while a territory does not have sovereign status .
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Original: A  &   case study showing the how the use of clean language and metaphor was applied to help a client overcome procrastination in a typical one-on-one session.
Revised: A & A case study showing the how the use of clean language and metaphor was applied to help a client overcome procrastination in a typical one-on-one session.
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Original:  A precised version published in Acuity No. 4, 2013.
Revised:  A precised version appeared in Acuity No. 4, 2013.
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Original:  Full paper at: URL External links www.cleanlanguage.co.uk homepage of the developers of Symbolic Modelling, with over 100 articles on Clean Language  www.cleanchange.co.uk news of applications of Clean Language and Symbolic Modelling, plus Clean community resources
Revised:  Full paper at: URL External links www.cleanlanguage.co.uk homepage of the developers of Symbolic Modelling, with over 100 articles on Clean Language www.cleanchange.co.uk news of applications of Clean Language and Symbolic Modelling, plus Clean Community resources
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Original: Symbolic Modelling is a therapeutic and coaching process developed by psychotherapists Penny Tompkins and James Lawley, based on the work of counselling psychologist David Grove.
Revised: Symbolic modelling is a therapeutic and coaching process developed by psychotherapists Penny Tompkins and James Lawley, based on the work of counselling psychologist David Grove.
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Original:  Needham-Didsbury, 2012 Intent The Symbolic Modelling process guides the client through an exploration of the client's own metaphors, their organization, interactions, and patterns.
Revised:  Needham-Didsbury, 2012 Intent The symbolic modelling process guides the client through an exploration of the client's own metaphors, their organization, interactions, and patterns.
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Original:  These embodied metaphors can restrict a client ’ s ways of viewing the world and his or her coping strategies, due to the inner logic prescribed by the metaphors.
Revised:  These embodied metaphors can restrict a client ' s ways of viewing the world and his or her coping strategies, due to the inner logic prescribed by the metaphors.
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Original:  Without shifting these metaphors, lasting change is difficult, as the embodied mind continues to work within the constraints of this old paradigm.
Revised:  Without shifting these metaphors, lasting change may be difficult, as the embodied mind continues to work within the constraints of this old paradigm.
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Original:  Without shifting these metaphors, lasting change is difficult, as the embodied mind continues to work within the constraints of this old paradigm.
Revised:  Without shifting these metaphors, lasting change is difficult, as the embodied mind may continue to work within the constraints of this old paradigm.
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Original: Lawley & Tompkins, 2000 A more structured subset of the above process called Symbolic Modelling Lite is used in coaching:
Revised: Lawley & Tompkins, 2000 A more structured subset of the above process called symbolic modelling lite is used in coaching:
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Original:    Category:Ethnic groups in Malaysia Category:Ethnic groups in Sab
Revised:  References Category:Ethnic groups in Malaysia Category:Ethnic groups in Sab
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Original:  They are a sub-ethnic group of the Dusunic group, now also known as Kadazandusun .
Revised:  They are a sub-ethnic group of the Dusunic group, now also known as Kadazan-Dusun .
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Original:  Lotud is one of the smallest ethnics in Sabah, as you can tell by the total population
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Original:  Mengiktu catatan james William Pryer.. nama org Sungai ini ditujukan kepada sekumpulan penduduk yg tidak tahu apa nama bangsa mereka..
Revised:  Mengikut catatan James William Pryer.. nama org Sungai ini ditujukan kepada sekumpulan penduduk yg tidak tahu apa nama bangsa mereka..
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Original:  Mengiktu catatan james William Pryer.. nama org Sungai ini ditujukan kepada sekumpulan penduduk yg tidak tahu apa nama bangsa mereka..
Revised:  Mengiktu catatan james William Pryer.. Nama org Sungai ini ditujukan kepada sekumpulan penduduk yg tidak tahu apa nama bangsa mereka..
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Original: (James william / Adda Pryer -tahun 1880)james william pryer merupakan seorang residen sandakan yg pertama. maka pada tahun 1881. akibat kesulitan komunikasi..maka dia menamakan sahaja sesiapa yg tinggal di tebing sungai sandakan sebagai org sungai..kerana apabila disoal apa kah bangsa mereka...mereka tidak tahu..
Revised: (James william dan Adda Pryer -tahun 1880)james william pryer merupakan seorang residen sandakan yg pertama. maka pada tahun 1881. akibat kesulitan komunikasi..maka dia menamakan sahaja sesiapa yg tinggal di tebing sungai sandakan sebagai org sungai..kerana apabila disoal apa kah bangsa mereka...mereka tidak tahu..
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Original: Bangsa Tombonuo atau Tambanua, Tambanuo , Tambanuva, Tambanwas, Tambenua, Tambunwas, Tembenua, Tombonuva, Tombonuwo, Tumbunwha, Tunbumohas adalah penduduk asli berasal dari sabah yg mendiami kawasan Kudat, Pitas, Paitan, Beluran dan Sugut.
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Original: The Tambanuo (or Tombonuo)  are an indigenous ethnic group residing in Sabah, eastern Malaysia on the island of Borneo.
Revised: The Tambanuo (or Tombonuo) people are an indigenous ethnic group residing in Sabah, eastern Malaysia on the island of Borneo.
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Original:   Category:Ethnic groups in Malaysia Category:Ethnic groups in Sabah  Category:Indigenous peoples of Southeast As
Revised:  References Category:Ethnic groups in Malaysia Category:Ethnic groups in Sabah Category:Indigenous peoples of Southeast As
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Original: Nascimento returned to Brazil in 1983 and was elected to the federal Chamber of Deputies as a member of the Democratic Labour Party (PDT).
Revised: Nascimento returned to Brazil in 1983 and was elected to the federal Chamber of Deputies as a member of the Democratic Labor Party (PDT).
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Original: Born in Franca, São Paulo state, Nascimento attended public school as a child and joined the military in 1929, but was excluded from the Army as a result of resisting racial discrimination a few years later.
Revised: Born in Franca, São Paulo state, Nascimento attended public school as a child and joined the military in 1929, but was expelled from the Army as a result of resisting racial discrimination a few years later.
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Original: Born in Franca, São Paulo state, Nascimento attended public school as a child and joined the military in 1929, but was excluded from the Army as a result of resisting racial discrimination a few years later.
Revised: Born in Franca, São Paulo state, Nascimento attended public school as a child and joined the military in 1929, but was excluded from the Army due to his resistance against racial discrimination a few years later.
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Original:  Black Experimental Theater From 1939 to 1941, Nascimento travelled throughout South America with a group of poets who called themselves the "Santa Hermandad Orquidea", or "Holy Brotherhood of the Orchid."
Revised:  Black Experimental Theater From 1939 to 1941, Nascimento traveled throughout South America with a group of poets who called themselves the "Santa Hermandad Orquidea", or "Holy Brotherhood of the Orchid."
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Original:  In the 1930's Nascimento was a member of the Brazilian Integralist Action, a fascist movement . URL He received a B.A. in Economics from the University of Rio de Janeiro in 1938, and graduate degrees from the Higher Institute of Brazilian Studies (1957) and the Oceanography Institute (1961).
Revised:  In the 1930's Nascimento was a member of the Brazilian Integralist Action, a fascist party . URL He received a B.A. in Economics from the University of Rio de Janeiro in 1938, and graduate degrees from the Higher Institute of Brazilian Studies (1957) and the Oceanography Institute (1961).
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Original:  The language is dying out , as most speakers currently use standard Malay in everyday speech.
Revised:  The language is becoming extinct , as most speakers currently use standard Malay in everyday speech.
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Original:  The language is dying out , as most speakers currently use standard Malay in everyday speech.
Revised:  The language is dying out , as most of the current generation use standard Malay in everyday speech.
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Original:   A movie about the Guatós has just been released: "[500 Almas]" ("500 Souls") - which is named after the approximately the number of Guatós left. 
Revised:  A movie about the Guatós has just been released: "[500 Almas]" ("500 Souls") - which is named after the approximately the number of Guatós left. References
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Original: The Guató are a nomadic Native American tribe of South America that live along the Paraguay River, along the border of modern-day Brazil and Bolivia.
Revised: The Guató are an indigenous people living on the Paraguay River, along the border of modern-day Brazil and Bolivia.
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Original:  They aided the Brazilians in the war with Paraguay 1865-70.
Revised:  They aided the Brazilians in the war with Paraguay 1865–70.
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Original:  The flight of Conacher is similar.
Revised:  Browne says that the flight of Conacher is similar.
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Original: Mania errabunda or Restless madness is a name for the tendency of senile people (usually elderly) to wander aimlessly away from home.
Revised: Mania errabunda or Restless madness is the tendency of senile people (usually elderly) to wander aimlessly away from home.
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Original:  The name is not much used now .
Revised:  The name is not much used in the 21st century .
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Original: As a theological virtue File:William-Adolphe Bouguereau (1825-1905) - Charity (1878).jpg|upCharity by William-Adolphe Bouguereau%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Charity is held to be the ultimate perfection of the human spirit, because it is said to both glorify and reflect the nature of God.
Revised:  File:William-Adolphe Bouguereau (1825-1905) - Charity (1878).jpg|upCharity by William-Adolphe Bouguereau%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Charity is held to be the ultimate perfection of the human spirit, because it is said to both glorify and reflect the nature of God.
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Original: As a theological virtue File:William-Adolphe Bouguereau (1825-1905) - Charity (1878).jpg|upCharity by William-Adolphe Bouguereau%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Charity is held to be the ultimate perfection of the human spirit, because it is said to both glorify and reflect the nature of God.
Revised: As a theological virtue %DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Charity is held to be the ultimate perfection of the human spirit, because it is said to both glorify and reflect the nature of God.
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Original:  Charity has two parts: love of God and love of man, which includes both love of one's neighbor and one's self.
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Original:  He describes it as: The fruits of charity are joy, peace, and mercy.
Revised:  He describes it as: 
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Original: See also File:La_Charité,_Jacques_Blanchard,_1633_(2).
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Original: Charity can also mean "Loving others because you love God."
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Original: In Christian theology, Charity (Latin Caritas) is considered as one of the seven virtues and is understood by Thomas Aquinas as "the friendship of man for God", which "unites us to God".
Revised: In Christian theology, Charity (Latin Caritas) is considered one of the seven virtues and is understood by Thomas Aquinas as "the friendship of man for God", which "unites us to God".
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Original:  a Greek word with meanings of "loving-kindness" or "love" Chesed – a similar Hebrew term, given the association of kindness and love Mettā – a  Pāli word glossed as "loving-kindness" and "friendliness" Seven Deadly Sins (opposite of the seven virtues) Virtue Altruism Dāna (Hinduism) Ren (Confucianism)
Revised:  a Greek word with meanings of "loving-kindness" or "love" Chesed – a similar Hebrew term, given the association of kindness and love Mettā – a Pāli term glossed as "loving-kindness" and "friendliness" Seven Deadly Sins (opposite of the seven virtues) Virtue Altruism Dāna (Hinduism) Ren (Confucianism)
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