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Original:  Ahmed Dawood “ was downsized to almost insignificance [but] he did not give up, he continued to develop things though at a much lesser scale ” . Of the remaining businesses that Ahmed Dawood headed as Chairman, it was Dawood  Hercules Chemical Ltd. and their fertiliser factory in Sheikhupura near Lahore which was a profitable joint venture.
Revised:  Ahmed Dawood “ was downsized to almost insignificance [but] he did not give up, he continued to develop things though at a much lesser scale ” . Of the remaining businesses that Ahmed Dawood headed as Chairman, it was Dawood Hercules Chemical Ltd. and their fertiliser factory in Sheikhupura near Lahore was a profitable joint venture.
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Original:  This, along with the Lawrencepur Woollen and Textile Mills Limited, Dawood Cotton Mills Limited, Burewala Textile Mills Limited, and Dilon Limited, was the backbone of Dawood ’ s economic activities.
Revised:  This, along with the Lawrencepur Woollen and Textile Mills Limited, Dawood Cotton Mills Limited, Burewala Textile Mills Limited, and Dilon Limited, was the backbone of Dawood ' s economic activities.
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Original:  In 1975, disappointed with the nationalisation policy of the government, Dawood too left Pakistan for the USA along with his wife .
Revised:  In 1975, disappointed with the nationalisation policy of the government, Dawood and his wife left Pakistan for the USA along with his wife .
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Original:  In 1975, disappointed with the nationalisation policy of the government, Dawood too left Pakistan for the USA along with his wife .
Revised:  In 1975, disappointed with the nationalisation policy of the government, Dawood too left Pakistan for the US .
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Original:  He set up an oil exploration company which successfully discovered oil wells in Texas.
Revised:  He set up an oil exploration company that discovered oil wells in Texas.
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Original:  He , however, returned to Pakistan in 1977.
Revised:  He then returned to Pakistan in 1977.
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Original:  By the late 1970s and early 80s, although the corporation was doing well financially, the siblings of Ahmed Dawood, decided to part ways with him.
Revised:  By the late 1970s and early 80s, although the corporation was doing well financially, Dawood's siblings parted ways with him.
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Original:  In 1990,  the stake of the American partner of the joint venture was bought by Ahmed Dawood and under his leadership as Chairman, Dawood acquired all of Hercules ’ stakes.
Revised:  In 1990, the stake of the American partner of the joint venture and as Chairman, Dawood acquired all of Hercules ’ stakes.
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Original:  In 1990,  the stake of the American partner of the joint venture was bought by Ahmed Dawood and under his leadership as Chairman, Dawood acquired all of Hercules ’ stakes.
Revised:  In 1990, the stake of the American partner of the joint venture was bought by Ahmed Dawood and under his leadership as Chairman, acquired all of Hercules ’ stakes.
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Original:  In 1990,  the stake of the American partner of the joint venture was bought by Ahmed Dawood and under his leadership as Chairman, Dawood acquired all of Hercules ’ stakes.
Revised:  In 1990, the stake of the American partner of the joint venture was bought by Ahmed Dawood and under his leadership as Chairman, Dawood acquired all of Hercules ' stakes.
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Original:  Nevertheless, he decided to leave India and migrated with his siblings and their entire families to Pakistan soon after it was founded . During the difficult time period before and after Partition, he played an important role in the escape and emigration of numerous Muslims from Bantva and Kathiawar via Bombay to Pakistan and supported his community in many ways.
Revised:  Nevertheless, he decided to leave India and migrated with his siblings and their entire families to Pakistan soon after it was founded . Around the time of the Partition, he played an important role in the escape and emigration of numerous Muslims from Bantva and Kathiawar via Bombay to Pakistan and supported his community in many ways.
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Original:  Nevertheless, he decided to leave India and migrated with his siblings and their entire families to Pakistan soon after it was founded . During the difficult time period before and after Partition, he played an important role in the escape and emigration of numerous Muslims from Bantva and Kathiawar via Bombay to Pakistan and supported his community in many ways.
Revised:  Nevertheless, he decided to leave India and migrated with his siblings and their entire families to Pakistan soon after it was founded . During the difficult time period before and after Partition, he supported his community and helped in the escape and emigration of numerous Muslims from Bantva and Kathiawar via Bombay to Pakistan and supported his community in many ways.
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Original:  Nevertheless, he decided to leave India and migrated with his siblings and their entire families to Pakistan soon after it was founded . During the difficult time period before and after Partition, he played an important role in the escape and emigration of numerous Muslims from Bantva and Kathiawar via Bombay to Pakistan and supported his community in many ways.
Revised:  Nevertheless, he decided to leave India and migrated with his siblings and their entire families to Pakistan soon after it was founded . During the difficult time period before and after Partition, he played an important role in the escape of Muslims from Bantva and Kathiawar via Bombay to Pakistan and supported his community in many ways.
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Original:  Nevertheless, he decided to leave India and migrated with his siblings and their entire families to Pakistan soon after it was founded . During the difficult time period before and after Partition, he played an important role in the escape and emigration of numerous Muslims from Bantva and Kathiawar via Bombay to Pakistan and supported his community in many ways.
Revised:  Nevertheless, he decided to leave India and migrated with his siblings and their entire families to Pakistan soon after it was founded . During the difficult time period before and after Partition, he played an important role in the escape and emigration of numerous Muslims from Bantva and Kathiawar via Bombay to Pakistan 
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Original:  He and his family migrated to Karachi with a few personal belongings they could carry .
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Original:  His way of wholesale buys and retail sell led him grow to expand his activities .
Revised:  His strategy involved purchasing wholesale and selling retail .
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Original:  He then also got involved in the industrial sector by setting up a cotton ginning factory in his native place Bantva.
Revised:  He also set up a cotton ginning factory in his native place Bantva.
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Original:  Altogether, Ahmed Dawood had some 26 shops and offices across British India.
Revised:  Altogether, Dawood had some 26 shops and offices across British India.
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Original:  He was widely considered as a successful businessman and was about to finalise a deal with one of the leading traders and industrialists of the time, Nagindas Fulchand Chinai, to establish a viscose manufacturing joint venture when India got partitioned.
Revised:  He was about to finalise a deal with one of the leading traders and industrialists of the time, Nagindas Fulchand Chinai, to establish a viscose manufacturing joint venture when India got partitioned.
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Original:  He went for just three years to school , like many others in his time and environs.
Revised:  He had three years of formal education , like many others in his time and environs.
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Original:  He followed the family tradition and got involved into trading .
Revised:  He followed the family tradition and went into the family business .
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Original:  When he was 12 years old , he was sent to stay with his maternal grandfather, Abdul Ghani Haji Noor Muhammad.
Revised:  When he was 12 , he was sent to stay with his maternal grandfather, Abdul Ghani Haji Noor Muhammad.
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Original:  Over two years, he learned basic trade of cotton yarn, wheat, and grains in Shimoga , in nowadays Karnataka .
Revised:  Over two years, he learned basic trade of cotton yarn, wheat, and grains in Shimoga (later Karnataka) .
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Original:  He was then sent for another two years to near Madras to learn to work with more responsibilities.
Revised:  He was then sent for another two years to the Madras area and assigned more responsibilities.
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Original:   Category:Russian male judoka Category:Living people Category:Olympic judoka of Russia Category:Judoka at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:  1988 births Category:People from Nazran Category:Ingush people Category:Judoka at the 2019 European Games Category:European Games medalists in judo Category:European Games gold medalists for Russia Category:Judoka at the 2020 Summer Olympi
Revised:  Category:Russian male judoka Category:Living people Category:Olympic judoka of Russia Category:Judoka at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category: Judoka at the 2020 Summer Olympics Category: 1988 births Category:People from Nazran Category:Ingush people Category:Judoka at the 2019 European Games Category:European Games medalists in judo Category:European Games gold medalists for Russia Category:Judoka at the 2020 Summer Olympi
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Original:   Category:Russian male judoka Category:Living people Category:Olympic judoka of Russia Category:Judoka at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:  1988 births Category:People from Nazran Category:Ingush people Category:Judoka at the 2019 European Games Category:European Games medalists in judo Category:European Games gold medalists for Russia Category:Judoka at the 2020 Summer Olympi
Revised:  Category:Russian male judoka Category:Living people Category:Olympic judoka of Russia Category:Judoka at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category: 1988 births Category:People from Nazran Category:Ingush people Category:Judoka at the 2019 European Games Category:European Games medalists in judo Category:European Games gold medalists for Russ
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Original: Born in England, George H Evans (March 25, 1805 in Bromyard, Herefordshire, England – February 2, 1856 in Granville,(now known as Keansburg) N.J., U.S.) was a radical reformer , with experience in the Working Men's movement of 1829 and the trade union movements of the 1830s.
Revised:  George H Evans (March 25, 1805 in Bromyard, Herefordshire, England – February 2, 1856 in Granville,(now known as Keansburg) N.J., U.S.) was a radical reformer , with experience in the Working Men's movement of 1829 and the trade union movements of the 1830s.
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Original: Born in England, George H Evans (March 25, 1805 in Bromyard, Herefordshire, England – February 2, 1856 in Granville,(now known as Keansburg) N.J., U.S.) was a radical reformer , with experience in the Working Men's movement of 1829 and the trade union movements of the 1830s.
Revised: Born in England, George H Evans (March 25, 1805 in Bromyard, Herefordshire, England – February 2, 1856 in Granville,(now known as Keansburg) N.J., U.S.) was a radical reformer who was in the Working Men's movement of 1829 and the trade union movements of the 1830s.
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Original:  In 1844, Evans,  trade unionist John Windt,  former Chartist Thomas Devyr and others founded the National Reform Association, which lobbied Congress and sought political supporters with the slogan "Vote Yourself a Farm."
Revised:  In 1844, Evans, the trade unionist John Windt, former Chartist Thomas Devyr and others founded the National Reform Association, which lobbied Congress and sought political supporters with the slogan "Vote Yourself a Farm."
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Original:  In 1844, Evans,  trade unionist John Windt,  former Chartist Thomas Devyr and others founded the National Reform Association, which lobbied Congress and sought political supporters with the slogan "Vote Yourself a Farm."
Revised:  In 1844, Evans, trade unionist John Windt, the former Chartist Thomas Devyr and others founded the National Reform Association, which lobbied Congress and sought political supporters with the slogan "Vote Yourself a Farm."
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Original:  He also spent the period 1837–41, and the period after 1848, on his farm in New Jersey (Lause, 2005) . George Henry Evans died in 1855.
Revised:  He also spent the period 1837–41, and the period after 1848, on his farm in New Jersey . George Henry Evans died in 1855.
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Original:  ISBN 1605069523 Garry Trompf, The Religons of Oceania, Routledge (1995);
Revised:  ISBN 1605069523 Garry Trompf, The Religions of Oceania, Routledge (1995);
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Original:  ISBN 0415060192 George Grey, Polynesian Mythology, Kessinger Publishing, 2004 ' ISBN 1419242555 Barbara A.
Revised:  ISBN 0415060192 George Grey, Polynesian Mythology, Kessinger Publishing, 2004 ; ISBN 1419242555 Barbara A.
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Original: The mythology of Oceania and the gods of the Pacific region are both complex and diverse.
Revised: The mythology of Oceania and the Gods of the Pacific region are both complex and diverse.
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Original:  It then erupted into other mutinies and civilian rebellions chiefly in the upper Gangetic plain and central India, though incidents of revolt also occurred farther north and east. c 8 The rebellion posed a considerable threat to British power in that region, and was contained only with the rebels'
Revised:  It then erupted into other mutinies and civilian rebellions chiefly in the upper Gangetic plain and central India, though incidents of revolt also occurred farther north and east. 8 The rebellion posed a considerable threat to British power in that region, and was contained only with the rebels'
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Original:  It then erupted into other mutinies and civilian rebellions chiefly in the upper Gangetic plain and central India, though incidents of revolt also occurred farther north and east. c 8 The rebellion posed a considerable threat to British power in that region, and was contained only with the rebels'
Revised:  It then erupted into other mutinies and civilian rebellions chiefly in the upper Gangetic plain and central India, though incidents of revolt also occurred farther north and east. c The rebellion posed a considerable threat to British power in that region, and was contained only with the rebels'
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Original:  defeat in Gwalior on 20 June 1858. 10 On 1 November 1858, the British granted amnesty to all rebels not involved in murder, though they did not declare the hostilities to have formally ended until 8 July 1859.
Revised:  defeat in Gwalior on 20 June 1858. On 1 November 1858, the British granted amnesty to all rebels not involved in murder, though they did not declare the hostilities to have formally ended until 8 July 1859.
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Original:  Another important figure was José de San Martín, who helped create the United Provinces of Rio de la Plata and became the first president of Peru.
Revised:  Another important figure was José de San Martín, who helped create the United Provinces of the Río de la Plata and became the first president of Peru.
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Original: The precipitating event was that King went public that the French was state was essentially bankrupt, and because of that he convened the États généraux (Estates general) to replenish state coffers.
Revised: The precipitating event was that King went public that the French state was essentially bankrupt, and because of that he convened the États généraux (Estates general) to replenish state coffers.
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Original:  The Estates-General was made up of 3 estates/orders: Centralizing monarchical power, i.e. Royal absolutism, onward from Louis XIII in 1614 inward to the royal court in Versailles led to  snowball effect that ended up alienating both nobility and bourgeoisie.
Revised:  The Estates-General was made up of 3 estates/orders: Centralizing monarchical power, i.e. Royal absolutism, onward from Louis XIII in 1614 inward to the royal court in Versailles led to a snowball effect that ended up alienating both nobility and bourgeoisie.
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Original:  This led to a feeling of discrimination among  bourgeoisie, which itself was an engine of the RevolutionId., pp. 2-3.
Revised:  This led to a feeling of discrimination among the bourgeoisie, which itself was an engine of the RevolutionId., pp. 2-3.
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Original: The Age of Revolution is a period from the late-18th to the mid-19th centuries in which a number of significant revolutionary movements occurred in most of Europe and the Americas  .
Revised: The Age of Revolution is a period from the late-18th to the mid-19th centuries during which a number of significant revolutionary movements occurred in most of Europe and the Americas .
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Original: The Age of Revolution is a period from the late-18th to the mid-19th centuries in which a number of significant revolutionary movements occurred in most of Europe and the Americas  .
Revised: The Age of Revolution is a period from the late-18th to the mid-19th centuries in which a number of significant revolutionary movements occurred in most of Europe and the Americas . .
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Original:  He was the commander of the  Armée de libération nationale Kamerounaise ( ANLK ) in the Littoral Province.
Revised:  He became a commander of the Armée de libération nationale Kamerounaise ( ANLK ) in the Littoral Province.
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Original:   On the 27 and 28 of June 1959 forty men of Tankeu Noés's forces attacked the military camp of Mboppi in Douala and took 19 guns.
Revised:  On the 27 and 28 of June 1959 forty of Tankeu Noé's fighters attacked the military camp of Mboppi in Douala and took 19 guns.
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Original:  After a stunning provincial season with the Bay of Plenty he was picked for the Chiefs 2020 wider squad and made his debut against the Crusaders in week 3 and was on the bench the following 2 weeks.
Revised:  After a stunning provincial season with the Bay of Plenty 
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Original:  Having played for so many different clubs worldwide, Geldenhuys is rumoured to have one of the most impressively epic stashes of rugby jerseys and kit known to man.
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Original:  His performances in the tournament led to him being named 2012 IRB Junior Player of the URL He was also included in the squad for the 2013 IRB Junior World Championship, but was later withdrawn to make him available for the senior national team.
Revised:  His performances in the tournament led to him being named 2012 IRB Junior Player of the Year. He was also included in the squad for the 2013 IRB Junior World Championship, but was later withdrawn to make him available for the senior national team.
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Original: Jan Lodewyk Serfontein (born 15 April 1993) is a South African  rugby union rugby player.
Revised: Jan Lodewyk Serfontein (born 15 April 1993) is a South African professional rugby union rugby player.
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Original: Kiir migrated to the USA at the end of 1999.
Revised: Kiir migrated to the United States at the end of 1999.
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Original: With the re-introduction of multi-party democracy in 1991, Ntumazah returned to Cameroon and reentered politics as one of the leaders of the reborn UPC, still a radical. sfn|E.K.|2010 The UPC was divided by internal disagreements during the 1990s.
Revised: With the re-introduction of multi-party democracy in 1991, Ntumazah returned to Cameroon and reentered politics as one of the leaders of the reborn UPC, still a radical. The UPC was divided by internal disagreements during the 1990s.
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Original:  Augustin Frédéric Kodock's moderate faction, which was allied to the umazRDPC , emerged from the intraparty struggles as the dominant faction, although it was opposed by the party's more radical members.
Revised:  Augustin Frédéric Kodock's moderate faction, which was allied to the RDPC , emerged from the intraparty struggles as the dominant faction, although it was opposed by the party's more radical members.
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Original:  Kodock was also re-elected to the National Assembly from Nyong-et-Kelle constituency in the 1997 parliamentary election Ndeh Ntumazah died at King's College Hospital in London, United Kingdom, on 21 January 2010, states his daughter Mabi Ntumazah with whom he lived with until he sadly passed away.
Revised:  Kodock was also re-elected to the National Assembly from Nyong-et-Kelle constituency in the 1997 parliamentary election Ndeh Ntumazah died at King's College Hospital in London, United Kingdom, on 21 January 2010.
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Original:  President Paul Biya decreed should receive an official burial in Bamenda .
Revised:  President Paul Biya decreed should receive an official burial in Bamenda .
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Original:  Ntumazah then founded the "One Kamerun Movement - OK" in the British-controlled Southern Cameroons, with himself as president, a disguised version of the UPC.
Revised:  Ntumazah then founded the One Kamerun movement in the British-controlled Southern Cameroons, with himself as president, a disguised version of the UPC.
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Original:  He was married to  Mbongo from Bassa Litoral of Cameroon  He joined the Union of the Peoples of Cameroon (UPC) in the early 1950s.
Revised:  He was married to Mrs Mbongo from Bassa Litoral of Cameroon He joined the Union of the Peoples of Cameroon (UPC) in the early 1950s.
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Original:  He was married to  Mbongo from Bassa Litoral of Cameroon  He joined the Union of the Peoples of Cameroon (UPC) in the early 1950s.
Revised:  He was married to Mbongo from Bassa Litoral of Cameroon . He joined the Union of the Peoples of Cameroon (UPC) in the early 1950s.
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Original:  President Paul Biya decreed that his body should be brought back to Cameroon and would receive an official burial in Bamenda .
Revised:  President Paul Biya decreed that his body should be brought back to Cameroon and would receive an official burial in Bamenda .
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Original:  The game was not as sanitised as it is in the European Super League era and matches could be attritional affairs.
Revised:  The game was not as sanitised as it is in the Super League era and matches could be attritional affairs.
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Original: Karel Thomas van Vollenhoven (29 April 1935 – 21 October 2017) was a South African rugby league and rugby union footballer of the 1950s and 1960s.
Revised: Karel Thomas van Vollenhoven (29 April 1935 – 21 October 2017) was a South African rugby league and rugby union footballer who played in the 1950s and 1960s.
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Original: Van Vollenhoven was brought into a Saints side to add a scoring threat out wide, in a side that at the time, was more noted for its forward prowess.
Revised: Van Vollenhoven was brought into a St. Helens team to add a scoring threat out wide, in a side that at the time, was more noted for its forward prowess.
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Original:  The crew cut wingman would prove over the years what an extraordinary talent he was, with arguably his finest moment coming in the 1958–59 Championship Final at Odsal, where his hat trick of tries helped Saints overcome Hunslet.
Revised:  The crew cut wingman would prove over the years what an extraordinary talent he was, with arguably his finest moment coming in the 1958–59 Championship Final at Odsal, where his hat trick of tries helped St. Helens overcome Hunslet.
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