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Original:  While the two parties struggled with one another to shape the political future of the region, Mauritania often became a neutral party which would break any deadlocks.
Revised:  Both two parties struggled with one another to shape the political future of the region, Mauritania often became a neutral party which would break any deadlocks.
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Original:  While the two parties struggled with one another to shape the political future of the region, Mauritania often became a neutral party which would break any deadlocks.
Revised:  While the two parties struggled with each other to shape the political future of the region, Mauritania often became a neutral party which would break any deadlocks.
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Original:  While the two parties struggled with one another to shape the political future of the region, Mauritania often became a neutral party which would break any deadlocks.
Revised:  While the two parties struggled with one another to shape the political future of the region, Mauritania often became a neutral party that would break any deadlocks.
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Original:  The RDA held a congress on 15 November 1958 to discuss the recent election results and the division became clear with Modibo Keïta from French Sudan and Doudou Gueye from Senegal arguing for primary federation (a federation which would include France and the colonies in a unified system ) and Félix Houphouët-Boigny of the Ivory Coast dismissing the idea.
Revised:  The RDA held a congress on 15 November 1958 to discuss the recent election results and the division became clear with Modibo Keïta from French Sudan and Doudou Gueye from Senegal arguing for primary federation , which would include France and the colonies in a unified system ) and Félix Houphouët-Boigny of the Ivory Coast dismissing the idea.
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Original:  The RDA held a congress on 15 November 1958 to discuss the recent election results and the division became clear with Modibo Keïta from French Sudan and Doudou Gueye from Senegal arguing for primary federation (a federation which would include France and the colonies in a unified system ) and Félix Houphouët-Boigny of the Ivory Coast dismissing the idea.
Revised:  The RDA held a congress on 15 November 1958 to discuss the recent election results and the division became clear with Modibo Keïta from French Sudan and Doudou Gueye from Senegal arguing for primary federation (a federation which would include France and the colonies in a unified system , and Félix Houphouët-Boigny of the Ivory Coast dismissing the idea.
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Original:  The RDA held a congress on 15 November 1958 to discuss the recent election results and the division became clear with Modibo Keïta from French Sudan and Doudou Gueye from Senegal arguing for primary federation (a federation which would include France and the colonies in a unified system ) and Félix Houphouët-Boigny of the Ivory Coast dismissing the idea.
Revised:  The RDA held a congress on 15 November 1958 to discuss the recent election results and the division became clear with Modibo Keïta from French Sudan and Doudou Gueye from Senegal arguing for primary federation (a federation which would include France and the colonies in a unified system ) and Félix Houphouët-Boigny of the Ivory Coast dismissing that idea.
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Original:  French Sudan and Senegal, despite longstanding divisions between their main political parties, were the most enthusiastic pushers for this federationwhile Dahomey and Upper Volta were more hesitant in their desire to join the federation.
Revised:  French Sudan and Senegal, despite longstanding divisions between their main political parties, were the most enthusiastic pushers for the federation, but Dahomey and Upper Volta were more hesitant in their desire to join the federation.
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Original:  French Sudan and Senegal were the leaders at the congress with Modibo Keïta named the President of the meeting and Léopold Sédar Senghor of Senegal being the key leader on many issues, including developing the name Mali Federation for the proposed union.
Revised:  French Sudan and Senegal were the leaders at the congress with Modibo Keïta named the president of the meeting and Léopold Sédar Senghor of Senegal being the key leader on many issues, including developing the name Mali Federation for the proposed union.
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Original:  Although Upper Volta and Dahomey declared formal support for the federation, and Upper Volta even approved the Mali Federation Constitution on 28 January 1959, political pressure from France and the Ivory Coast ( both of which opposed the federation  for very different reasons ) resulted in neither ratifying a constitution which would include them within the federation.
Revised:  Although Upper Volta and Dahomey declared formal support for the federation, and Upper Volta even approved the Mali Federation Constitution on 28 January 1959, political pressure from France and the Ivory Coast , both of which opposed the federation for very different reasons ) resulted in neither ratifying a constitution which would include them within the federation.
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Original:  Although Upper Volta and Dahomey declared formal support for the federation, and Upper Volta even approved the Mali Federation Constitution on 28 January 1959, political pressure from France and the Ivory Coast ( both of which opposed the federation  for very different reasons ) resulted in neither ratifying a constitution which would include them within the federation.
Revised:  Although Upper Volta and Dahomey declared formal support for the federation, and Upper Volta even approved the Mali Federation Constitution on 28 January 1959, political pressure from France and the Ivory Coast ( both of which opposed the federation although for very different reasons ) resulted in neither ratifying a constitution which would include them within the federation.
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Original:  Although Upper Volta and Dahomey declared formal support for the federation, and Upper Volta even approved the Mali Federation Constitution on 28 January 1959, political pressure from France and the Ivory Coast ( both of which opposed the federation  for very different reasons ) resulted in neither ratifying a constitution which would include them within the federation.
Revised:  Although Upper Volta and Dahomey declared formal support for the federation, and Upper Volta even approved the Mali Federation Constitution on 28 January 1959, political pressure from France and the Ivory Coast ( both of which opposed the federation for very different reasons , resulted in neither ratifying a constitution which would include them within the federation.
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Original:  Although Upper Volta and Dahomey declared formal support for the federation, and Upper Volta even approved the Mali Federation Constitution on 28 January 1959, political pressure from France and the Ivory Coast ( both of which opposed the federation  for very different reasons ) resulted in neither ratifying a constitution which would include them within the federation.
Revised:  Although Upper Volta and Dahomey declared formal support for the federation, and Upper Volta even approved the Mali Federation Constitution on 28 January 1959, political pressure from France and the Ivory Coast ( both of which opposed the federation for very different reasons ) resulted in neither ratifying a constitution that would include them within the federation.
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Original:  The result is that only the colonies of French Sudan ( by this point called the Sudanese Republic) and Senegal were engaged in the discussions of the formation of the federation by 1959.
Revised:  The result is that only the colonies of French Sudan ( now called the Sudanese Republic) and Senegal were engaged in the discussions of the formation of the federation by 1959.
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Original:  Keïta's Union Soudanaise-Rassemblement Démocratique Africain (US-RDA) party won 76\% of the votes in French Sudan and all of the seats in the territorial assembly and Senghor's Union Progressiste Sénégalaise (UPS) won 81\% of the vote and all of the seats in Senegal's territorial assembly.
Revised:  Keïta's Union Soudanaise-Rassemblement Démocratique Africain (US-RDA) won 76\% of the votes in French Sudan and all of the seats in the territorial assembly and Senghor's Union Progressiste Sénégalaise (UPS) won 81\% of the vote and all of the seats in Senegal's territorial assembly.
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Original:  Keïta's Union Soudanaise-Rassemblement Démocratique Africain (US-RDA) party won 76\% of the votes in French Sudan and all of the seats in the territorial assembly and Senghor's Union Progressiste Sénégalaise (UPS) won 81\% of the vote and all of the seats in Senegal's territorial assembly.
Revised:  Keïta's Union Soudanaise-Rassemblement Démocratique Africain (US-RDA) party won 76\% of the votes in French Sudan and all of the seats in the territorial assembly . Senghor's Union Progressiste Sénégalaise (UPS) won 81\% of the vote and all of the seats in Senegal's territorial assembly.
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Original:  This challenge to Senghor's party showed some of the weakness in Senghor's domestic political base and required a complex system of alliances with various domestic constituencies, both of which would become important as the federation progressed.
Revised:  That challenge to Senghor's party showed some of the weakness in Senghor's domestic political base and required a complex system of alliances with various domestic constituencies, both of which would become important as the federation progressed.
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Original:  Sy was arrested on election day as a result of some rioting  which was blamed on his party.
Revised:  Sy was arrested on election day because of some rioting which was blamed on his party.
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Original:  Sy was arrested on election day as a result of some rioting  which was blamed on his party.
Revised:  Sy was arrested on election day as a result of some rioting , which was blamed on his party.
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Original:  This involved three different political projects with the principle of parity (even representation from both colonies) enshrined in each : A federal government, united social movements (a labor and youth movement) , and a shared political party for both countries.
Revised:  That involved three different political projects with the principle of parity (even representation from both colonies) enshrined in each : A federal government, united social movements (a labor and youth movement) , and a shared political party for both countries.
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Original:  This involved three different political projects with the principle of parity (even representation from both colonies) enshrined in each : A federal government, united social movements (a labor and youth movement) , and a shared political party for both countries.
Revised:  This involved three different political projects with the principle of parity (even representation from both colonies) enshrined in each ' a federal government, united social movements (a labor and youth movement) , and a shared political party for both countries.
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Original:  This involved three different political projects with the principle of parity (even representation from both colonies) enshrined in each : A federal government, united social movements (a labor and youth movement) , and a shared political party for both countries.
Revised:  This involved three different political projects with the principle of parity (even representation from both colonies) enshrined in each : A federal government, united social movements (a labour and youth movement) , and a shared political party for both countries.
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Original:  This involved three different political projects with the principle of parity (even representation from both colonies) enshrined in each : A federal government, united social movements (a labor and youth movement) , and a shared political party for both countries.
Revised:  This involved three different political projects with the principle of parity (even representation from both colonies) enshrined in each : A federal government, united social movements (a labor and youth movement) and a shared political party for both countries.
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Original:  The federal government was going to have an assembly composed of 20 members from each of the colonies (40 in total), a President (set to be elected in August 1960) , and six federal ministers (with 3 from each colony).
Revised:  The federal government would have an assembly composed of 20 members from each of the colonies (40 in total), a President (set to be elected in August 1960) , and six federal ministers (with 3 from each colony).
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Original:  The federal government was going to have an assembly composed of 20 members from each of the colonies (40 in total), a President (set to be elected in August 1960) , and six federal ministers (with 3 from each colony).
Revised:  The federal government was going to have an assembly composed of 20 members from each of the colonies (40 in total), a President (set to be elected in August 1960) and six federal ministers (with 3 from each colony).
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Original:  Further , as part of the parity principle, any legislative initiatives required a signature by both the premier (then later the president) and the minister responsible for that issue.
Revised:  Furthermore , as part of the parity principle, any legislative initiatives required a signature by both the premier (then later the president) and the minister responsible for that issue.
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Original:  This sharing was to the advantage of French Sudan  which had almost a third of its 1959 budget provided by this tax income.
Revised:  This sharing was to the advantage of French Sudan , which had almost a third of its 1959 budget provided by this tax income.
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Original:  This sharing was to the advantage of French Sudan  which had almost a third of its 1959 budget provided by this tax income.
Revised:  This sharing was to the advantage of French Sudan which had almost a third of its 1959 budget provided by that tax income.
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Original:  At the same time, the Mali federation sought to create unified social organizations which would facilitate the union between the countries.
Revised:  At the same time, the Mali federation sought to create unified social organisations to facilitate the union between the countries.
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Original:  This involved creating labor movements and youth movements , which would operate at both the federal and national levels , and a unified political party.
Revised:  That involved creating labour movements and youth movements , which would operate at both the federal and national levels , and a unified political party.
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Original:  This involved creating labor movements and youth movements , which would operate at both the federal and national levels , and a unified political party.
Revised:  This involved creating labor movements and youth movements to operate at both the federal and national levels , and a unified political party.
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Original:  This involved creating labor movements and youth movements , which would operate at both the federal and national levels , and a unified political party.
Revised:  This involved creating labor movements and youth movements , which would operate at both the federal and national levels and a unified political party.
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Original:  The PFA was organized separately from the federal government but with many of the same members and leaders.
Revised:  It was organised separately from the federal government but with many of the same members and leaders.
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Original:  in addition to have a regional influence  Djibo Bakary of Niger and Emile Zinsou of Dahomey were named the vice-presidents of the party.
Revised:  in addition to have a regional influence , Djibo Bakary of Niger and Emile Zinsou of Dahomey were named the vice-presidents of the party.
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Original:  As articulated at the first PFA congress in July 1959 by Senghor, the party would be the single political party in the country , aiming to unite across the different ethnic groups in the territory.
Revised:  As articulated at the first PFA congress in July 1959 by Senghor, it would be the single political party in the country , aiming to unite across the different ethnic groups in the territory.
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Original:  As articulated at the first PFA congress in July 1959 by Senghor, the party would be the single political party in the country , aiming to unite across the different ethnic groups in the territory.
Revised:  As articulated at the first PFA congress in July 1959 by Senghor, the party would be the single political party in the country and aim to unite across the different ethnic groups in the territory.
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Original:  These negotiations were formally started when French president Charles de Gaulle visited Bamako on 13 December 1959, and lasted until March 1960.
Revised:  The negotiations were formally started when French president Charles de Gaulle visited Bamako on 13 December 1959, and lasted until March 1960.
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Original:  These negotiations were formally started when French president Charles de Gaulle visited Bamako on 13 December 1959, and lasted until March 1960.
Revised:  These negotiations were formally started when French President Charles de Gaulle visited Bamako on 13 December 1959, and lasted until March 1960.
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Original:  Although the French had earlier resisted the Mali Federation, when the two countries showed willingness to remain within the French Community and the Franc zone and keep the French military bases within its territory, the French supported the formation of the federation.
Revised:  Although the French had resisted the Mali Federation, when the two countries showed willingness to remain within the French Community and the Franc zone and keep the French military bases within its territory, the French supported the formation of the federation.
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Original:  Although the French had earlier resisted the Mali Federation, when the two countries showed willingness to remain within the French Community and the Franc zone and keep the French military bases within its territory, the French supported the formation of the federation.
Revised:  Although the French had earlier resisted the Mali Federation, but after the two countries showed willingness to remain within the French Community and the Franc zone and keep the French military bases within its territory, the French supported the formation of the federation.
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Original:  Although the French had earlier resisted the Mali Federation, when the two countries showed willingness to remain within the French Community and the Franc zone and keep the French military bases within its territory, the French supported the formation of the federation.
Revised:  Although the French had earlier resisted the Mali Federation, when the two countries showed willingness to remain within the French Community and the franc zone and to keep the French military bases within its territory, the French supported the formation of the federation.
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Original:  The federal government would have an assembly composed of 20 members from each of the colonies (40 in total), a President (set to be elected in August 1960) and six federal ministers (with 3 from each colony).
Revised:  The federal government would have a federal assembly composed of 20 members from each of the colonies (40 in total), a President (set to be elected in August 1960) and six federal ministers (with 3 from each colony).
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Original: The chronicler al-Bakri claims a fortress "surrounded by 20,000 palms" was built here by Yannu ibn Umar, a brother of the first Almoravid chieftans , Yahya ibn Umar al-Lamtuni and Abu Bakr ibn Umar, and marked the frontier between the dominions of the Lamtuna and the Gudala.al-Bakri, in Levtzion and Hopkins (1981: p.73) Both of them Berber Sanhaja desert tribes and one time allies, the Lamtuna formed the core of the Almoravids after the Gudala broke away.
Revised: The chronicler al-Bakri claims a fortress "surrounded by 20,000 palms" was built here by Yannu ibn Umar, a brother of the first Almoravid chieftains , Yahya ibn Umar al-Lamtuni and Abu Bakr ibn Umar, and marked the frontier between the dominions of the Lamtuna and the Gudala.al-Bakri, in Levtzion and Hopkins (1981: p.73) Both of them Berber Sanhaja desert tribes and one time allies, the Lamtuna formed the core of the Almoravids after the Gudala broke away.
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Original: Azougui (or Azuggi  ) was a town in north western Mauritania, lying on the Adrar Plateau, north west of Atar.
Revised: Azougui (or Azuggi , ) was a town in north western Mauritania, lying on the Adrar Plateau, north west of Atar.
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Original:  And it is also believed that The Secret History of the Mongols is based on it .
Revised:  Some believe that The Secret History of the Mongols is based on it .
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Original:  The books was written in Mongolian language, therefore it was considered sacred.
Revised:  The book was written in Mongolian language, therefore it was considered sacred.
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Original:  The books was written in Mongolian language, therefore it was considered sacred.
Revised:  The books was written in the Mongolian language and was therefore considered sacred.
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Original: The legacy of the Indo-Greeks starts with the formal end of the Indo-Greek Kingdom from the 1st century CE , as the Greek communities of central Asia and northwestern India lived under the control of the Kushan branch of the Yuezhi, apart from a short-lived invasion of the Indo-Parthian Kingdom.
Revised: The legacy of the Indo-Greeks starts with the formal end of the Indo-Greek Kingdom from the 1st century , as the Greek communities of central Asia and northwestern India lived under the control of the Kushan branch of the Yuezhi, apart from a short-lived invasion of the Indo-Parthian Kingdom.
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Original: At the beginning of the 2nd century CE , the Central India Satavahana king Gautamiputra Satakarni (r. 106–130 CE ) was described as the "Destroyer of Sakas (Western Kshatrapas), Yavanas (Indo-Greeks) and Pahlavas (Indo-Parthians)" in his inscriptions, suggesting a continued presence of the Indo-Greeks until that time.
Revised: At the beginning of the 2nd century , the Central India Satavahana king Gautamiputra Satakarni (r. 106–130 CE ) was described as the "Destroyer of Sakas (Western Kshatrapas), Yavanas (Indo-Greeks) and Pahlavas (Indo-Parthians)" in his inscriptions, suggesting a continued presence of the Indo-Greeks until that time.
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Original: At the beginning of the 2nd century CE , the Central India Satavahana king Gautamiputra Satakarni (r. 106–130 CE ) was described as the "Destroyer of Sakas (Western Kshatrapas), Yavanas (Indo-Greeks) and Pahlavas (Indo-Parthians)" in his inscriptions, suggesting a continued presence of the Indo-Greeks until that time.
Revised: At the beginning of the 2nd century CE , the Central India Satavahana king Gautamiputra Satakarni (r. 106–130 ) was described as the "Destroyer of Sakas (Western Kshatrapas), Yavanas (Indo-Greeks) and Pahlavas (Indo-Parthians)" in his inscriptions, suggesting a continued presence of the Indo-Greeks until that time.
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Original: Greek era  A Greek "Yona" calendar era seems to have been in use in Northwestern Indian for several centuries following the foundation of the Indo-Greek kingdom.
Revised: Calendar A Greek "Yona" calendar era seems to have been in use in Northwestern Indian for several centuries following the foundation of the Indo-Greek kingdom.
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