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Original:  The USGS preliminary report states the quake 's epicenter was located near a golf course in an upscale community 3 kilometers (2 miles) southwest from Chino Hills  or 47 km (29 miles) east-southeast of Los Angeles().
Revised:  The USGS preliminary report states the quake 's epicenter was located near a golf course in an upscale community 3 kilometers (2 miles) southwest from Chino Hills , or 47 km (29 miles) east-southeast of Los Angeles().
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Original:  Public safety officials are asking people who live in the area to inspect their home for gas and water leaks, as well as contacting older or disabled relatives to check on them .
Revised:  Public safety officials are asking people who live in the area to inspect their homes for gas and water leaks, as well as contacting older or disabled relatives to check on them .
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Original:  Public safety officials are asking people who live in the area to inspect their home for gas and water leaks, as well as contacting older or disabled relatives to check on them .
Revised:  Public safety officials are asking people who live in the area to inspect their home for gas and water leaks, as well as to contact older or disabled relatives to check on them .
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Original:  Public safety officials are asking people who live in the area to inspect their home for gas and water leaks, as well as contacting older or disabled relatives to check on them .
Revised:  Public safety officials are asking people who live in the area to inspect their home for gas and water leaks, as well as contacting older or disabled relatives to check their safety .
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Original:  As many as thirty-four aftershocks registering a magnitude 3.8 and lower , have been recorded since the initial quake .
Revised:  As many as thirty-four aftershocks registering a magnitude 3.8 and lower have been recorded since the initial quake .
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Original:  As many as thirty-four aftershocks registering a magnitude 3.8 and lower , have been recorded since the initial quake .
Revised:  As many as thirty-four aftershocks registering a magnitude 3.8 and lower , have been recorded since the initial earthquake .
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Original:  The earthquake originally registered a 5.8, but was later reduced to a 5.4 by the USGS  
Revised:  The earthquake originally registered a 5.8, but was later reduced to a 5.4 by the USGS . 
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Original:  He is current condition is not life threating.
Revised:  His current condition is not life threating.
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Original: Frasier star, Kelsey Grammer has checked into a hospital in New York after feeling faint.
Revised: American actor Kelsey Grammer has checked into a hospital in New York after feeling faint.
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Original:  Grammer is famous for appearing on  sitcoms such as Frasier and Cheers.
Revised:  Grammer is famous for appearing on television sitcoms such as Frasier and Cheers.
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Original:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for  Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series  three times and a golden globe for Best Performance by an Actor  in a TV-Series in 2001
Revised:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for " Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series three times and a golden globe for Best Performance by an Actor in a TV-Series in 2001
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Original:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for  Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series  three times and a golden globe for Best Performance by an Actor  in a TV-Series in 2001
Revised:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series " three times and a golden globe for Best Performance by an Actor in a TV-Series in 2001
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Original:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for  Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series  three times and a golden globe for Best Performance by an Actor  in a TV-Series in 2001
Revised:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series three times and a Golden Globe Award for " Best Performance by an Actor in a TV-Series in 2001
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Original:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for  Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series  three times and a golden globe for Best Performance by an Actor  in a TV-Series in 2001
Revised:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series three times and a golden globe for Best Performance by an Actor " in a TV-Series in 2001
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Original: It is believed that the symptons may have been caused by a mix up in his medication.
Revised: According to his publicist, Stan Rosenfield, the symptons may have been caused by a mix up in his medication.
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Original:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for "Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series" three times and a Golden Globe Award for "Best Performance by an Actor" in a TV-Series in 2001
Revised:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for "Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series" three times and one Golden Globe Award for "Best Performance by an Actor" in a TV-Series in 2001
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Original:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for "Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series" three times and a Golden Globe Award for "Best Performance by an Actor" in a TV-Series in 2001
Revised:  He won the Primetime Emmy Award for "Outstanding Lead Actor in a Comedy Series" three times and a Golden Globe Award for "Best Performance by an Actor" in a TV Series in 2001
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Original: The International Olympic Committee have lifted a ban on Iraqi athletes participating in the Beijing Olympics.
Revised: The International Olympic Committee (IOC) has lifted a ban on Iraqi athletes participating in the Beijing Olympics.
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Original:  The IOC placed a ban on the countrys participation on July 24th claiming a political influence within Iraq's national Olympic committee.
Revised:  The IOC placed a ban on the country's participation on July 24th claiming a political influence within Iraq's national Olympic committee.
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Original:  The IOC placed a ban on the countrys participation on July 24th claiming a political influence within Iraq's national Olympic committee.
Revised:  The IOC placed a ban on the countrys participation on July 24 claiming a political influence within Iraq's national Olympic committee.
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Original:  Even though the ban has been lifted  five of the seven athletes are still unable to participate due to the final date of selections  passed.
Revised:  Even though the ban has been lifted , five of the seven athletes are still unable to participate due to the final date of selections passed.
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Original:  Even though the ban has been lifted  five of the seven athletes are still unable to participate due to the final date of selections  passed.
Revised:  Even though the ban has been lifted five of the seven athletes are still unable to participate due to the final date of selections having passed.
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Original:  This came after the Iraqi government's suspension of the National Olympic Committee  of Iraq in May 2008.
Revised:  This came after the Iraqi government's suspension of the National Olympic Committee (NOC) of Iraq in May 2008.
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Original:  Two athletes participating in sprinting and rowing are expected to compete  [ 
Revised:  Two athletes participating in sprinting and rowing are expected to compete . [ 
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Original:  The Iraqi people need hope, and sport gives them a lot of hope.  
Revised:  The Iraqi people need hope, and sport gives them a lot of hope. " 
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Original:  The 2008 Summer Olympics Logo The decision to remove the ban is a result of the Iraqi government's agreement to allow free elections for their National Olympic Committee while under international scrutiny.
Revised:  The decision to remove the ban is a result of the Iraqi government's agreement to allow free elections for their National Olympic Committee while under international scrutiny.
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Original:  The rule is currently being discussed in the Iranian parliament with a new bill that, if approved, the group would be facing the death penalty 
Revised:  A bill is currently before the Iranian parliament with a new bill that, if approved, the group would be facing the death penalty 
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Original:  The rule is currently being discussed in the Iranian parliament with a new bill that, if approved, the group would be facing the death penalty 
Revised:  The rule is currently being discussed in the Iranian parliament that, if approved, the group would be facing the death penalty 
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Original:  The rule is currently being discussed in the Iranian parliament with a new bill that, if approved, the group would be facing the death penalty 
Revised:  The rule is currently being discussed in the Iranian parliament with a new bill that, if approved, would mean the death penalty 
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Original:  The rule is currently being discussed in the Iranian parliament with a new bill that, if approved, the group would be facing the death penalty 
Revised:  The rule is currently being discussed in the Iranian parliament with a new bill that, if approved, the group would be facing the death penalty for the group
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Original: According to Islamic tradition, the act of abandoning the Muslim faith -- denominated as the crime of "Ertedad" -- is a violation of the words of the Prophet with death as punishment.
Revised: According to Islamic tradition, the act of abandoning the Muslim faith — denominated as the crime of "Ertedad" -- is a violation of the words of the Prophet with death as punishment.
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Original: According to Islamic tradition, the act of abandoning the Muslim faith -- denominated as the crime of "Ertedad" -- is a violation of the words of the Prophet with death as punishment.
Revised: According to Islamic tradition, the act of abandoning the Muslim faith -- denominated as the crime of "Ertedad" — is a violation of the words of the Prophet with death as punishment.
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Original:  It was noted that in the month of April , 10  Christians were arrested in the city of Shiraz as well.
Revised:  It was noted that in the month of April 10 Christians were arrested in the city of Shiraz as well.
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Original:  It was noted that in the month of April , 10  Christians were arrested in the city of Shiraz as well.
Revised:  It was noted that in the month of April , 10 , Christians were arrested in the city of Shiraz as well.
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Original: Irani officials have arrested sixteen Iranians in Malakshahr, on the outskirts of the central Iranian city of Esfahān.
Revised: Irani officials have arrested 16 Iranians in Malakshahr, on the outskirts of the central Iranian city of Esfahān.
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Original:  The group, consisting of six women, eight men and two adolescents  are charged with conversion from Islam to Christianity ;
Revised:  The group, consisting of six women, eight men and two adolescents , are charged with conversion from Islam to Christianity ;
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Original:  However, a small private home which has been converted to an evangelical church was taking part in the conversion and baptism of three new members of the church and the group was taken into custody.
Revised:  However, a small private home which has been converted to an evangelical church was taking part in the conversion and baptism of three new members of the church ; the group was taken into custody.
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Original:  The owners of the home were an elderly couple , who according to local reports, were beaten up before they were taken to an unmarked jailing facility.
Revised:  The owners of the home were an elderly couple who, according to local reports, were beaten up before they were taken to an unmarked jailing facility.
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Original:  According to Islamic tradition, the act of abandoning the Muslim faith — denominated as the crime of "Ertedad" — is a violation of the words of the Prophet with death as punishment.
Revised:  According to Islamic tradition, the act of abandoning the Muslim faith , denominated as the crime of "Ertedad" — is a violation of the words of the Prophet with death as punishment.
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Original:  According to Islamic tradition, the act of abandoning the Muslim faith — denominated as the crime of "Ertedad" — is a violation of the words of the Prophet with death as punishment.
Revised:  According to Islamic tradition, the act of abandoning the Muslim faith — denominated as the crime of "Ertedad" , is a violation of the words of the Prophet with death as punishment.
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Original: Irani officials have arrested 16 Iranians in Malakshahr, on the outskirts of the central Iranian city of Esfahān.
Revised: Iranian officials have arrested 16 Iranians in Malakshahr, on the outskirts of the central Iranian city of Esfahān.
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Original: The Prime Minister of Tonga (pictured) is to receive the king's powers in 2010 George Tupou V, the current king of Tonga  has announced that he will give up his position as an absolute monarch by relinquishing most of his powers.
Revised: The Prime Minister of Tonga (pictured) is to receive the king's powers in 2010 George Tupou V, the current king of Tonga , has announced that he will give up his position as an absolute monarch by relinquishing most of his powers.
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Original:  In 2006  eight people were killed in Tonga during a pro-democracy rally.
Revised:  In 2006 , eight people were killed in Tonga during a pro-democracy rally.
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Original:  The study notes that now an average of 66 children a day that require as a result.
Revised:  The study notes that now an average of 66 children a day require as a result.
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Original:  The study notes that now an average of 66 children a day require as a result.
Revised:  The study notes that an average of 66 children a day require as a result.
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Original:  The study notes that now an average of 66 children a day require as a result.
Revised:  The study notes that now an average of 66 children a day required as a result.
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Original:  An earlier soccer victory on March 27, against w: Japan, also led to public unrest in the capital.
Revised:  An earlier soccer victory on March 27, against Japan, also led to public unrest in the capital.
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Original:  Ting Chen, community elected board member of the Wikimedia Foundation, announced that the Chinese Wikipedia was unblocked earlier today Wikinews previously reported the the Chinese Wikipedia was unblocked in China, although that unblock did not cover the whole of the country.
Revised:  Ting Chen, community elected board member of the Wikimedia Foundation, announced that the Chinese Wikipedia was unblocked earlier today Wikinews previously reported that the Chinese Wikipedia was unblocked in China, although that unblock did not cover the whole of the country.
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Original:  This follows on from yesterday's rejection of an appeal to the the U.K's Law Lords   
Revised:  This follows on from yesterday's rejection of an appeal to the the U.K's Law Lords . 
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Original: With terrorism being bandied about as a motivation, and allegations that McKinnon deleted files and disrupted the operation of systems he is alleged to have broken into, an additional concern from his lawyers is that under such circumstances he could be detaintained at the Guantanamo Bay facility.
Revised: With terrorism being bandied about as a motivation, and allegations that McKinnon deleted files and disrupted the operation of systems he is alleged to have broken into, an additional concern from his lawyers is that under such circumstances he could be detained at the Guantanamo Bay facility.
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Original: Image:GMKtrafalgar.jpg|Gary McKinnon Beleaguered British computer hacker Gary McKinnon has vowed to fight U.S. extradition proceedings through the European Court of Human Rights.
Revised:  Beleaguered British computer hacker Gary McKinnon has vowed to fight U.S. extradition proceedings through the European Court of Human Rights.
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Original:  Apart from basic applications, some companies also demonstrated some examples when deploying and programming in any Linux-based platform.
Revised:  Apart from basic applications, some companies also demonstrated some examples of deploying and programming in any Linux-based platform.
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Original:  Apart from basic applications, some companies also demonstrated some examples when deploying and programming in any Linux-based platform.
Revised:  Apart from basic applications, some companies also demonstrated some examples when deploying and programming on a Linux-based platform.
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Original:  In additions , some experts recommended an enterprise considering an user 's needs before implying any Linux-based platform as desktop platform in an enterprise.
Revised:  In addition , some experts recommended an enterprise considering an user 's needs before implying any Linux-based platform as desktop platform in an enterprise.
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Original:  In additions , some experts recommended an enterprise considering an user 's needs before implying any Linux-based platform as desktop platform in an enterprise.
Revised:  In additions , some experts recommended enterprises to consider user needs before introducing Linux as the desktop platform in an enterprise.
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Original:  In additions , some experts recommended an enterprise considering an user 's needs before implying any Linux-based platform as desktop platform in an enterprise.
Revised:  In additions , some experts recommended an enterprise considering an user 's needs before implying any Linux-based platform as desktop platform in the enterprise.
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Original:  This anouncment comes after it was revealed that Olmert is facing involvement in a corruption investigation in Israel.
Revised:  This announcement comes after it was revealed that Olmert is facing involvement in a corruption investigation in Israel.
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Original:  His comments were in reference to Olmert's recent efforts to advance the negotiations on achieving peace in the Middle East   
Revised:  His comments were in reference to Olmert's recent efforts to advance the negotiations on achieving peace in the Middle East . 
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Original:  Gordon Johndroe (pictured) released a statement on the resignation "I was forced to defend myself against relentless attacks from self-appointed fighters for justice who sought to depose me from my position, when the ends sanctified all the means,"said Olmert, during the speech in which he announced his resignation.
Revised:  "I was forced to defend myself against relentless attacks from self-appointed fighters for justice who sought to depose me from my position, when the ends sanctified all the means,"said Olmert, during the speech in which he announced his resignation.
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Original: A file photograph of Ehud OlmertEhud Olmert , the current Prime Minister of Israel, has said that he will resign from his position as leader after his party's leadership contest in September.
Revised: Ehud Olmert , the current Prime Minister of Israel, has said that he will resign from his position as leader after his party's leadership contest in September.
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Original:  Gordon Johndroe (pictured) released a statement on the resignation Gordon Johndroe, White House spokesperson, commented on the resignation.
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Original:  Mary Price, the Media Relations and Internal Communications Manager for UWE, gave Wikinews the following statement : It was announced by BBC Television News at 17:35BST, 3rd August, that Catherine Mullany's husband Ben, passed away in hospital in Swansea this afternoon following 4 days in a Coma
Revised:  Mary Price, the Media Relations and Internal Communications Manager for UWE, gave Wikinews the following statement It was announced by BBC Television News at 17:35BST, 3rd August, that Catherine Mullany's husband Ben, passed away in hospital in Swansea this afternoon following 4 days in a Coma
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Original:  Mary Price, the Media Relations and Internal Communications Manager for UWE, gave Wikinews the following statement : It was announced by BBC Television News at 17:35BST, 3rd August, that Catherine Mullany's husband Ben, passed away in hospital in Swansea this afternoon following 4 days in a Coma
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Original: (Originally published 1st August) Catherine Mullany, a newly married British woman, and her husband, Ben Mullany, have been shot while on honeymoon in Antigua.
Revised:  Catherine Mullany, a newly married British woman, and her husband, Ben Mullany, have been shot while on honeymoon in Antigua.
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Original:  Catherine died on the scene, and Ben died in hospital in Swansea on 3rd August 2008 following 4 days in a coma .
Revised:  Catherine died on the scene, while Ben is in a critical condition in Hospital .
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Original:  Ben was a physiotherapy student at the University of the West of England (UWE), which is located in Bristol, UK . Mary Price, the Media Relations and Internal Communications Manager for UWE, gave Wikinews the following statement
Revised:  Ben was a physiotherapy student at the University of the West of England (UWE), which is located in Bristol, England . Mary Price, the Media Relations and Internal Communications Manager for UWE, gave Wikinews the following statement
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Original:  Canadian Public Safety Minister Stockwell Day described the attack as "horrific" according to Agence France-Presse and "probably one-of-a-kind in Canadian history" according to the Canadian Press   .
Revised:  Canadian Public Safety Minister Stockwell Day described the attack as "horrific" according to Agence France-Presse and "probably one-of-a-kind in Canadian history" according to the Canadian Press . .
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Original: Li was silent before a judge Friday moring in the Provincial Court of Manitoba in Portage la Prairie, CNN reported.
Revised: Li was silent before a judge Friday morning in the Provincial Court of Manitoba in Portage la Prairie, CNN reported.
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Original: According to a Canadian Press report published Thursday and a CNN report Friday, 40-year-old Vince Weiguang Li of Edmonton, Alberta has been arrested for allegedly stabbing and decapitating 22-year-old Timothy McLean who was a fellow passenger on a Greyhound bus in Manitoba, Canada on Wednesday night.
Revised: According to a Canadian Press report published Thursday and a CNN report Friday, 40-year-old Vince Weiguang Li of Edmonton, Alberta has been arrested for allegedly stabbing and decapitating a fellow passenger on a Greyhound bus in Manitoba, Canada on Wednesday night.
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Original:  Canadian Public Safety Minister Stockwell Day described the attack as "horrific" according to Agence France-Presse and "probably one-of-a-kind in Canadian history" according to the Canadian Press .
Revised:  Canadian Public Safety Minister Stockwell Day described the attack as "horrific" according to Agence France-Presse and "probably one-of-a-kind in Canadian history" according to the Canadian Press 
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Original: A Canadian Greyhound bus While the RCMP has not released the victim's name, the Canadian Press and CNN have reported that the deceased is Tim McLean, 22, who had been traveling from Edmonton to Winnipeg, where he lived.
Revised:  While the RCMP has not released the victim's name, the Canadian Press and CNN have reported that the deceased is Tim McLean, 22, who had been traveling from Edmonton to Winnipeg, where he lived.
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