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Original:  This is common for many tiny lakes, farm ponds, or minor lakes in remote areas.
Revised:  This is common for many tiny lakes, farm ponds, and minor lakes in remote areas.
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Original:  A lake designated as unnamed can be distinguished from a lake actually named Unnamed Lake by its capitalization , Some lakes named the latter are: northwestern Montana, U.S. northeastern West Virginia, U.S  .
Revised:  A lake designated as unnamed can be distinguished from a lake actually named Unnamed Lake by its capitalization . Some lakes named the latter are: northwestern Montana, U.S. northeastern West Virginia, U.S .
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Original:  A lake designated as unnamed can be distinguished from a lake actually named Unnamed Lake by its capitalization.
Revised: Designated A lake designated as unnamed can be distinguished from a lake actually named Unnamed Lake by its capitalization.
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Original:   A Russian equivalent is various geographical features named Безымянный and similar (Bezymyannyy).
Revised:  Russian equvalent A Russian equivalent is various geographical features named Безымянный and similar (Bezymyannyy).
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Original: Luis Marileo Colipí was a Mapuche chief active in the Mapuche resistance to the Occupation of Araucanía ( 1861-1883 ).
Revised: Luis Marileo Colipí was a Mapuche chief active in the Mapuche resistance to the Occupation of Araucanía ( 1861–1883 ).
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Original:  His brother who had also participated in the uprising was taken prisioner and killed.
Revised:  His brother who had also participated in the uprising was taken prisoner and killed.
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Original:  However, the fact that there is no meaning to the combination of letters can inhibit these once activated words . Each activated connection would carry a different weight, and thus the word "WORK" in the example would be activated more than any other word (and therefore recognized by a reader).
Revised:  However, the fact that there is no meaning to the combination of letters can inhibit these words which were previously activated . Each activated connection would carry a different weight, and thus the word "WORK" in the example would be activated more than any other word (and therefore recognized by a reader).
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Original:  Vorster entered Stellenbosch University, known as the "cradle of Afrikaner nationalism"  to study law.
Revised:  Vorster entered Stellenbosch University, known as the "cradle of Afrikaner nationalism" , to study law.
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Original:  (also known as John Vorster) 13 December 1915 – 10 September 1983) was a South African politician who served as the Prime Minister of South Africa from 1966 to 1978 and as the fourth State President of South Africa from 1978 to 1979.
Revised:  (also known as John Vorster) 13 December 1915 – 10 September 1983) was a South African politician who served as the Prime Minister of South Africa from 1966 to 1978 and as the fourth state president of South Africa from 1978 to 1979.
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Original:  (also known as John Vorster) 13 December 1915 – 10 September 1983) was a South African politician who served as the Prime Minister of South Africa from 1966 to 1978 and as the fourth state president of South Africa from 1978 to 1979.
Revised:  (also known as John Vorster) 13 December 1915 – 10 September 1983) was a South African politician who served as the prime minister of South Africa from 1966 to 1978 and as the fourth state president of South Africa from 1978 to 1979.
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Original: 𝔼𝕨𝕒𝕟 𝕍𝕠𝕣𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣 Balthazar Johannes "B. J." Vorster (;
Revised:  Balthazar Johannes "B. J." Vorster (;
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Original: James Carlos Aquino Yap Jr. (born April 19, 2007), better known as Bimby, and previously known as Baby James Yap, is a Filipino child actor of Chinese descent, TV-media personality and the son of Kris Aquino and James Yap.
Revised: James Carlos Aquino Yap Jr. (born April 19, 2007), better known as Bimby, and previously known as "Baby James" Yap, is a Filipino child actor of Chinese descent, TV-media personality and the son of Kris Aquino and James Yap.
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Original: Early and personal life Yap was born to television host and actress Kris Aquino and basketball player James Yap.
Revised: Early life Yap was born to television host and actress Kris Aquino and basketball player James Yap.
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Original:   He is currently home schooled.
Revised:  Personal life He is currently home schooled.
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Original: James Carlos Aquino Yap Jr. (born April 19, 2007), better known as Bimby, and previously known as "Baby James" Yap, is a Filipino child actor of Chinese descent, TV-media personality and the son of Kris Aquino and James Yap .
Revised: James Carlos Aquino Yap Jr. (born April 19, 2007), better known as Bimby, and previously known as "Baby James" Yap, is a Filipino media personality and child actor .
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Original:  In October 2020, Yap was reported to be tall and still growing, according to an Instagram post by his mother Kris Aquino .
Revised:  In October 2020, Yap was reported to be tall and still growing, according to an Instagram post by his mother Kris Aquino 
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Original:  Both his parents are of Chinese descent .
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Original:  Philippine showbiz and Social media describe him as a handsomely boy with dysfunctional sexual disorder.
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Original: James Carlos  Aquino Yap Jr. (born April 19, 2007) , better known as Bimby, and previously known as "Baby James" Yap, is a Filipino media personality and child actor.
Revised: James Carlos "Bimby" Aquino Yap Jr. (born April 19, 2007) , better known as Bimby, and previously known as "Baby James" Yap, is a Filipino media personality and child actor.
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Original: James Carlos  Aquino Yap Jr. (born April 19, 2007) , better known as Bimby, and previously known as "Baby James" Yap, is a Filipino media personality and child actor.
Revised: James Carlos Aquino Yap Jr. (born April 19, 2007) is a Filipino media personality and child actor.
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Original: Members of the Freedom Association Category:People from Orsett Category:People from Putney Category:Place of death missing Category:Politics of the Borough of Basildon Category:UK Independence Party people Category:UK MPs 1987–1992 Category:UK MPs 1992–1997 Category:UK MPs 1997–2001 Category:20th-century British women politicians Category:21st-century British women politicians Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Deaths from dement
Revised: Members of the Freedom Association Category:People from Orsett Category:People from Putney Category:Place of death missing Category:Politics of the Borough of Basildon Category:UK Independence Party people Category:UK MPs 1987–1992 Category:UK MPs 1992–1997 Category:UK MPs 1997–2001 Category:20th-century British women politicians Category:21st-century British women politicians Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Deaths from dementia Category:20th-century English wom
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Original: Members of the Freedom Association Category:People from Orsett Category:People from Putney Category:Place of death missing Category:Politics of the Borough of Basildon Category:UK Independence Party people Category:UK MPs 1987–1992 Category:UK MPs 1992–1997 Category:UK MPs 1997–2001 Category:20th-century British women politicians Category:21st-century British women politicians Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Deaths from dementia Category:20th-century English  wom
Revised: Members of the Freedom Association Category:People from Orsett Category:People from Putney Category:Place of death missing Category:Politics of the Borough of Basildon Category:UK Independence Party people Category:UK MPs 1987–1992 Category:UK MPs 1992–1997 Category:UK MPs 1997–2001 Category:20th-century British women politicians Category:21st-century British women politicians Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Deaths from dementia Category:20th-century English women Category:21st-century English wom
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Original:  On her birthday in 2010, she married Peter Clarke, a widower, who survived her until January URL She had no URL In Who's Who (2014) she did not detail her marital status beyond "married".
Revised:  On her birthday in 2010, she married Peter Clarke, a widower, who survived her until January URL She had no children. In Who's Who (2014) she did not detail her marital status beyond "married".
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Original: UK Independence Party people Category:UK MPs 1987–1992 Category:UK MPs 1992–1997 Category:UK MPs 1997–2001 Category:20th-century British women politicians Category:21st-century British women politicians Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Neurological disease deaths in the United States Category:Deaths from dementia Category:20th-century English women Category:20th-century English people Category:21st-century English women Category:21st-century English peop
Revised: UK Independence Party people Category:UK MPs 1987–1992 Category:UK MPs 1992–1997 Category:UK MPs 1997–2001 Category:20th-century British women politicians Category:21st-century British women politicians Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Neurological disease deaths in the United Kingdom Category:Deaths from dementia Category:20th-century English women Category:20th-century English people Category:21st-century English women Category:21st-century English peop
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Original: UK Independence Party people Category:UK MPs 1987–1992 Category:UK MPs 1992–1997 Category:UK MPs 1997–2001 Category:20th-century British women politicians Category:21st-century British women politicians Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Neurological disease deaths in the United Kingdom Category:Deaths from dementia Category:20th-century English women Category:20th-century English people Category:21st-century English women Category:21st-century English peop
Revised: UK Independence Party people Category:UK MPs 1987–1992 Category:UK MPs 1992–1997 Category:UK MPs 1997–2001 Category:20th-century British women politicians Category:21st-century British women politicians Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Neurological disease deaths in England Category:Deaths from dementia Category:20th-century English women Category:20th-century English people Category:21st-century English women Category:21st-century English peop
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Original: Uncorrected proof is a term that describes a proof version (on paper or in digital form) which is yet to receive final author and publisher approval.
Revised: An uncorrected proof is a proof version (on paper or in digital form) which is yet to receive final author and publisher approval.
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Original:  In the press room of the Cody Enterprise . . . - NARA - 539218.jpg|Bill Hosokawa pulling a galley proof while working as a newspaper editor in the Heart Mountain concentration camp , 1943]]
Revised:  In the press room of the Cody Enterprise . . . - NARA - 539218.jpg|Bill Hosokawa pulling a galley proof while working as a newspaper editor in the Heart Mountain Relocation Center , 1943]]
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Original:   In printing and publishing, proofs are the preliminary versions of publications meant for review by authors, editors, and proofreaders, often with extra-wide margins.
Revised:  My photo In printing and publishing, proofs are the preliminary versions of publications meant for review by authors, editors, and proofreaders, often with extra-wide margins.
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Original: My photo My photo In printing and publishing, proofs are the preliminary versions of publications meant for review by authors, editors, and proofreaders, often with extra-wide margins.
Revised:  My photo In printing and publishing, proofs are the preliminary versions of publications meant for review by authors, editors, and proofreaders, often with extra-wide margins.
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Original: My photo My photo In printing and publishing, proofs are the preliminary versions of publications meant for review by authors, editors, and proofreaders, often with extra-wide margins.
Revised: My photo In printing and publishing, proofs are the preliminary versions of publications meant for review by authors, editors, and proofreaders, often with extra-wide margins.
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Original: Galley proofs or galleys are so named because in the days of hand-set letterpress printing in the 1650s, the printer would set the page into galleys, namely the metal trays into which type was laid and tightened into place.
Revised: Galley proofs or galleys are so named because in the days of hand-set letterpress printing in the 1650s, the printer would set the page into "galleys," metal trays into which type was laid and tightened into place.
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Original:  The Last Colonies by Robert Aldrich and John Connell, pg 137
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Original:  He  served as President of the Congress of New Caledonia from 2011 to 2012, and from 2013 to 2014.
Revised:  He has served as President of the Congress of New Caledonia from 2011 to 2012, and from 2013 to 2014.
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Original: Roch Wamytan Roch Wamytan or Rock Wamytan (born 13 December 1950) is Kanak politician from New Caledonia.
Revised: Roch Wamytan or Rock Wamytan (born 13 December 1950) is Kanak politician from New Caledonia.
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Original: After several weeks of hypoventilation training, the physiological adaptations that occur enable to delay the onset of acidosis during a maximal exertion test.
Revised: After several weeks of hypoventilation training, physiological adaptations occur that delay the onset of acidosis during a maximal exertion test.
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Original:  The hypoventilation technique consists of short breath holdings and can be performed in different types of exercise: running, cycling, swimming, rowing, skating …
Revised:  The hypoventilation technique consists of short breath holdings and can be performed in different types of exercise: running, cycling, swimming, rowing, skating , etc.
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Original: History  The first known form of hypoventilation occurred in the 1950s during training of the runners of Eastern Europe and former USSR.Xavier Woorons, "Hypoventilation training, push your limits!", Arpeh, 2014, p. 21 () One of the most famous athletes to have used this method is Emil Zátopek, the Czech long-distance runner, 4 times Olympic gold medalist and former holder of 18 world records.
Revised: History ! The first known form of hypoventilation occurred in the 1950s during training of the runners of Eastern Europe and former USSR.Xavier Woorons, "Hypoventilation training, push your limits!", Arpeh, 2014, p. 21 () One of the most famous athletes to have used this method is Emil Zátopek, the Czech long-distance runner, 4 times Olympic gold medalist and former holder of 18 world records.
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Original: Physiological effects  When exercise is being performed, if the exhale-hold technique is properly applied, a decrease in O2 concentrations and an increase in CO2 concentrations occur in the lungs, the blood and the muscles.
Revised: Physiological effects !!! When exercise is being performed, if the exhale-hold technique is properly applied, a decrease in O2 concentrations and an increase in CO2 concentrations occur in the lungs, the blood and the muscles.
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Original: History The first known form of hypoventilation occurred in the 1950s during training of the runners of Eastern Europe and former USSR.Xavier Woorons, "Hypoventilation training, push your limits!", Arpeh, 2014, p. 21 () One of the most famous athletes to have used this method is Emil Zátopek, the Czech long-distance runner, 4 times Olympic gold medalist and former holder of 18 world records.
Revised: History The first known form of hypoventilation occurred in the 1950s during training of the runners of Eastern Europe and former USSR.Xavier Woorons, "Hypoventilation training, push your limits!", Arpeh, 2014, p. 21 () One of the most famous athletes to have used this method is Emil Zátopek, the Czech long-distance runner, four times Olympic gold medalist and former holder of 18 world records.
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Original:  To do so, one has to first exhale normally, without forcing, then hold one ’ s breath.
Revised:  To do so, one has to first exhale normally, without forcing, then hold one ' s breath.
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Original:  Zátopek, who was a precursor in training, regularly used to run by holding his breath in order to harden his training and simulate the conditions of competition.
Revised:  Zátopek, who was a precursor in training, regularly used to run by holding his breath to harden his training and simulate the conditions of competition.
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Original:  The effect of this kind of training was determined to decrease the body ’ s O2 content and simulate altitude training.
Revised:  The effect of this kind of training was determined to decrease the body ' s O2 content and simulate altitude training.
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Original:  Athletes who return progressively to their sporting activity after being injured, and who therefore have to protect their muscles, joints or tendons, could train at low or moderate intensity with hypoventilation.
Revised:  Athletes who return progressively to their sporting activity after being injured, and who therefore have to protect their muscles, joints and tendons, could train at low or moderate intensity with hypoventilation.
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Original:  Description In conflicts of laws there are three factors known as personal connecting factors which help jurisdictions determine which law should apply to a particular dispute.
Revised:  Description In conflicts of laws there are three factors known as personal connecting factors that help courts determine which law should apply to a particular dispute.
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Original:  Habitual residence is the newest concept of the three and is arguably becoming a more commonly used factor than domicile in many common law jurisdictions and within statutes and international conventions.
Revised:  Habitual residence is the newest concept of the three and is becoming a more commonly used factor than domicile in many common law jurisdictions and within statutes and international conventions.
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Original:  General principles There is no internationally agreed upon definition of Habitual Residence .
Revised:  General principles There is no internationally agreed upon definition of habitual residence .
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Original:  Numerous domestic statutes and conventions which use habitual residence, such as the Hague Conference on Private International Law, also do not define the term.
Revised:  Numerous domestic statutes and conventions that use habitual residence, such as the Hague Conference on Private International Law, also do not define the term.
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Original:  The lack of definition means that generally habitual residency is left to judicial interpretation by the courts in whichever jurisdiction is using it as a connecting factor.
Revised:  The lack of definition means that generally habitual residency is left to judicial interpretation by the courts in whichever jurisdiction uses it as a connecting factor.
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Original:  However, many scholars and courts have disagreed with this and believe that there are a number of factors that are to be considered in determining someone's habitual residence and while time in a given place is one of those factors  it is not determinative.
Revised:  However, many scholars and courts have disagreed with this and believe that there are a number of factors that are to be considered in determining someone's habitual residence and while the amount of time spent in a given place is one of those factors it is not determinative.
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Original:  However, many scholars and courts have disagreed with this and believe that there are a number of factors that are to be considered in determining someone's habitual residence and while time in a given place is one of those factors  it is not determinative.
Revised:  However, many scholars and courts have disagreed with this and believe that there are a number of factors that are to be considered in determining someone's habitual residence and while time in a given place is one of those factors , it is not determinative.
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Original:  Application Domestically, the use and application of habitual residence will depend on which states are involved in the dispute.
Revised:  Application Domestically, the use and application of habitual residence depends on which states are involved in the dispute.
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Original:  Each jurisdiction may use the habitual residence factor in different instances.
Revised:  Each jurisdiction may use habitual residence in different instances.
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Original:  Therefore, a person's habitual residence can have a significant impact on them when it is the factor, or a factor, used to determine which law will apply to a particular dispute.
Revised:  Therefore, a person's habitual residence can have a significant impact on them when it is the factor, or a factor, used to determine which law applies to a particular dispute.
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Original:  A person's habitual residence could affect marital disputes, land related disputes and theoretically any other type of dispute depending on the rules of the states involved.
Revised:  A person's habitual residence could affect marital disputes, land related disputes , succession, and other types of disputes or matters, depending on the rules of the states involved.
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Original:  Habitual residence is also applied frequently in international conventions which use habitual residence as the primary factor in determining which law will apply to a person.
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Original:  Comparison with domicile To  establish a domicile of choice, it is necessary to have a clear factual base in one state and that must be accompanied by an animus semper manendi ().
Revised:  Comparison with domicile Habitual residence is fact-dependent, it cannot be a purely legal concept and there are different views about the factual situations that it is supposed to denote. However, much of the case law on habitual residence suggests it is objective, seeking evidence of physical presence over a considerable period of time. The term arguably does have a a subjective element as well, specifically if it is considered synonymous with ordinary residence which requires as analysis of a persons "ordinary mode of living"Nafie v Badawy, 2015 ABCA 36, at para 68 (CanLII). However it is not universally accepted that habitual residence and ordinary residence are the same, making it debatable of habitual residence has subjective elements like ordinary residence. establish a domicile of choice, it is necessary to have a clear factual base in one state and that must be accompanied by an animus semper manendi ().
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Original:  Comparison with domicile To  establish a domicile of choice, it is necessary to have a clear factual base in one state and that must be accompanied by an animus semper manendi ().
Revised:  Comparison with domicile To In comparrison, to establish a domicile of choice, it is necessary to have a clear factual base in one state and that must be accompanied by an animus semper manendi ().
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Original:  The test for habitual residence is less demanding  .
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Original:  But it may be  difficult to determine where a person has a habitual residence if  constantly on the move and has no real or continuing connection with any of the countries through which  passed.
Revised:  However, it may be difficult to determine where a person has a habitual residence if constantly on the move and has no real or continuing connection with any of the countries through which passed.
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