wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The year after  he made a famed speech before 's parliament marking the 40th anniversary of German defeat in the war.
Revised: The year after , he made a famed speech before 's parliament marking the 40th anniversary of German defeat in the war.
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Original:  Following a career in law and business he turned to politics.
Revised:  Following a business and law career he turned to politics.
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Original:  Thursday's impact was caught on tape , showing a fireball the size of Earth  
Revised:  Thursday's impact was caught on video , showing a fireball the size of Earth 
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Original:   Thursday's impact was caught on video, showing a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
Revised:  Go caught Thursday's impact was caught on video, showing a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
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Original:   Thursday's impact was caught on video, showing a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
Revised:  Thursday's impact on video, showing a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
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Original:   Thursday's impact was caught on video, showing a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
Revised:  Thursday's impact was caught on video, which showed a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
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Original:  Scientists originally thought that there would not be any more Jupiter strikes for several centuries following SL9, but have now been proved wrong twice in as many years  
Revised:  Scientists originally thought that there would not be any more Jupiter strikes for several centuries following SL9, but have now been proved wrong twice in as many years . 
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Original: A similar impact occurred last July after a gargantuan asteroid collided into the planet.
Revised: A similar impact occurred last July after a large asteroid collided into the planet.
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Original:  Go caught Thursday's impact on video, which showed a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
Revised:  Got caught Thursday's impact on video, which showed a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
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Original:  Got caught Thursday's impact on video, which showed a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
Revised:  Go caught Thursday's impact on video, which showed a fireball the size of Earth after the object hit.
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Original:  Meanwhile, the Ministry has set up two aid camps for those experiencing poison symptoms
Revised:  The Ministry has meanwhile organized two camps for villagers experiencing symptoms of the poison
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Original: Health officials have requested assistance from the World Health Organization and the Center for Disease Control in preventing a widespread outbreak.
Revised: Health officials have requested assistance from the World Health Organization and the Center for Disease Control and Prevention in averting a widespread outbreak.
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Original:   Health officials have requested assistance from the World Health Organization and the US Centers for Disease Control and Prevention in averting a widespread outbreak.
Revised:  Officials have requested assistance from the World Health Organization and the US Centers for Disease Control and Prevention in averting a widespread outbreak.
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Original:   Health officials have requested assistance from the World Health Organization and the US Centers for Disease Control and Prevention in averting a widespread outbreak.
Revised:  Health officials have requested assistance from international organizations, including the WHO and CDC, in preventing a widespread outbreak.
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Original:  The Ministry has meanwhile organized two camps for villagers experiencing symptoms of the poison
Revised:  The Ministry has meanwhile organized two camps for villagers suffering from the poison
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Original:  Sometime during March residents of these remote villages began illegally mining gold in areas of high lead concentration.
Revised:  Sometime during March residents of remote villages began illegally mining gold in areas of high lead concentration.
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Original:  The government had initially found through their yearly immunization program that there were virtually no children in the villages of Zamfara.
Revised:  The government had found through their yearly immunization program that there were virtually no children in the villages of Zamfara.
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Original:  The government had initially found through their yearly immunization program that there were virtually no children in the villages of Zamfara.
Revised:  The government had initially found through their yearly immunization program that there were almost no children living in the villages of Zamfara.
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Original:  however, after a more thorough investigation, health officials recorded an abnormally large amount of lead in the residents ' bodies.
Revised:  however, after a more thorough investigation, health officials concluded that their was an abnormally large amount of lead in the residents ' bodies.
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Original:  however, after a more thorough investigation, health officials recorded an abnormally large amount of lead in the residents ' bodies.
Revised:  however, after a more thorough investigation, health officials recorded an abnormally large amount of lead circulating in the villagers ' bodies.
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Original: According to Henry Akpan, chief epidemiologist of Nigeria's Ministry of Health, 111 of the 163 recorded deaths have been of children, many only several years old.
Revised: According to Henry Akpan, chief epidemiologist at Nigeria's Ministry of Health, 111 of the 163 recorded deaths have been of children, many only several years old.
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Original: According to Henry Akpan, chief epidemiologist of Nigeria's Ministry of Health, 111 of the 163 recorded deaths have been of children, many only several years old.
Revised: According to Henry Akpan, chief epidemiologist of Nigeria's Ministry of Health, 111 of the 163 recorded deaths have been children, many only several years old.
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Original:  However, after an investigation, health officials concluded that their was an abnormally large amount of lead circulating in the villagers' bodies.
Revised:  However, after an investigation, health officials concluded that there was an abnormally large amount of lead circulating in the villagers' bodies.
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Original: Following a similar experiment last year, six men entered an enclosed room yesterday in Moscow in order to simulate a flight to Mars.
Revised: Following a similar experiment last year, six men entered an enclosed room yesterday in Moscow to simulate a flight to Mars.
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Original:  The six men of this experiment, named Mars-500 , area Chinese, a Frenchman, an Italian, and three Russians.
Revised:  The Mars-500 , area Chinese, a Frenchman, an Italian, and three Russians.
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Original:  The six men of this experiment, named Mars-500 , area Chinese, a Frenchman, an Italian, and three Russians.
Revised:  The six men of this experiment, named Mars-500 team are; Chinese, French, Italian, with the numbers rounded out by three Russians.
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Original:  The six waved goodbye, crying "see you in 520 days' time!" before entering the "spacecraft" . According to Wang, not being able to see their families and friends was one of the greatest challenges, although e-mail is allowed during the experiment.
Revised:  The six waved goodbye, crying "see you in 520 days' time!" . According to Wang, not being able to see their families and friends was one of the greatest challenges, although e-mail is allowed during the experiment.
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Original:  However, both Wang and the Frenchman, Romain Charles, felt proud to be part of the experiment.
Revised:  Both Wang and the Frenchman, Romain Charles, felt proud to be part of the experiment.
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Original:  However, both Wang and the Frenchman, Romain Charles, felt proud to be part of the experiment.
Revised:  However, both Wang and the Frenchman, Romain Charles, expressed pride to be part of the experiment.
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Original:  However, both Wang and the Frenchman, Romain Charles, felt proud to be part of the experiment.
Revised:  However, both Wang and the Frenchman, Romain Charles, felt proud to be part of this experiment.
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Original:  Wang said that "[i]t will be trying for all of us.
Revised:  Wang said , "[i]t will be trying for all of us.
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Original: The purpose of the experiment, which is a joined effort by the Russian Institute for Biomedical Problems (IBMP) and the European Space Agency , is to study the physical and psychological conditions of the astronauts.
Revised: The joint-effort project is being organised by the Russian Institute for Biomedical Problems (IBMP) and the European Space Agency , is to study the physical and psychological conditions of the astronauts.
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Original: The purpose of the experiment, which is a joined effort by the Russian Institute for Biomedical Problems (IBMP) and the European Space Agency , is to study the physical and psychological conditions of the astronauts.
Revised: The purpose of the experiment, which is a joined effort by the Russian Institute for Biomedical Problems (IBMP) and the European Space Agency ; the aim to study physical and psychological conditions of the astronauts.
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Original: The purpose of the experiment, which is a joined effort by the Russian Institute for Biomedical Problems (IBMP) and the European Space Agency , is to study the physical and psychological conditions of the astronauts.
Revised: The purpose of the experiment, which is a joined effort by the Russian Institute for Biomedical Problems (IBMP) and the European Space Agency , is to study the physical and psychological effects on would-be astronauts.
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Original:  However , as Russian was another primary language of the simulated trip, the Russian, Sukhrob Kamolov, stated that body language would be employed should they fail to understand one another.
Revised:  However , as Russian is another primary language of the simulated trip, the Russian, Sukhrob Kamolov, stated that body language would be employed should they fail to understand one another.
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Original:  However , as Russian was another primary language of the simulated trip, the Russian, Sukhrob Kamolov, stated that body language would be employed should they fail to understand one another.
Revised:  However , as Russian was another primary language for the simulated trip, the Russian, Sukhrob Kamolov, stated that body language would be employed should they fail to understand one another.
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Original:  However , as Russian was another primary language of the simulated trip, the Russian, Sukhrob Kamolov, stated that body language would be employed should they fail to understand one another.
Revised:  However , as Russian was another primary language of the simulated trip, Sukhrob Kamolov, stated that body language would be employed should they fail to understand one another.
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Original:  However , as Russian was another primary language of the simulated trip, the Russian, Sukhrob Kamolov, stated that body language would be employed should they fail to understand one another.
Revised:  However , as Russian was another primary language of the simulated trip, the Russian, Sukhrob Kamolov, stated body language will be used should they fail to understand one another.
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Original:  All the food was given at the beginning of the experiment, a part of which supplied by China.
Revised:  All the beginning of the experiment, a part of which supplied by China.
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Original:  All the food was given at the beginning of the experiment, a part of which supplied by China.
Revised:  All the food was given at the beginning of the experiment, and suppied by China.
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Original:  China is going to send three persons to Russia, and a team will also be there soon to help out .
Revised:  For backup, China is sending three mission support staff to Russia .
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Original:  In a similar experiment in 1999, a woman complained that the captain attempted to kiss her.
Revised:  In a similar experiment in 1999, a woman complained the captain attempted to kiss her.
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Original:  After 250 days of "travelling" to "Mars" , the group will split up with three staying in the "spacecraft" and the other three staying on the surface of "Mars".
Revised:  Following 250 days of "travelling" to "Mars" , the group will split up with three staying in the "spacecraft" and the other three staying on the surface of "Mars".
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Original:  After 250 days of "travelling" to "Mars" , the group will split up with three staying in the "spacecraft" and the other three staying on the surface of "Mars".
Revised:  After 250 days of "travelling" to Mars , the group will split up with three staying in the "spacecraft" and the other three staying on the surface of "Mars".
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Original:  After 250 days of "travelling" to "Mars" , the group will split up with three staying in the "spacecraft" and the other three staying on the surface of "Mars".
Revised:  After 250 days of "travelling" to "Mars" , the group will split . Three will stay in the "spacecraft" and the other three staying on the surface of "Mars".
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Original:  After 250 days of "travelling" to "Mars" , the group will split up with three staying in the "spacecraft" and the other three staying on the surface of "Mars".
Revised:  After 250 days of "travelling" to "Mars" , the group will split up with three staying in the "spacecraft" , the other three staying on the surface of "Mars".
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Original:  After 250 days of "travelling" to "Mars" , the group will split up with three staying in the "spacecraft" and the other three staying on the surface of "Mars".
Revised:  After 250 days of "travelling" to "Mars" , the group will split up with three staying in the "spacecraft" and the other three going to the surface of "Mars".
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Original:  Among them, only two will actually leave the "spacecraft" to study the surface of "Mars".
Revised:  Only two will actually leave the "spacecraft" to study the surface of "Mars".
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Original:  Then, after a month, the group will travel back to "Earth", which takes 240 days .
Revised:  After a month, the group will travel back to "Earth", which takes 240 days .
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Original:  Then, after a month, the group will travel back to "Earth", which takes 240 days .
Revised:  Then, after a month, the group will go through the return journey simulation, a 240 days .
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Original:  Then, after a month, the group will travel back to "Earth", which takes 240 days .
Revised:  Then, after a month, the group will travel back to "Earth", which takes 240 day trip .
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Original: Following a similar experiment in 2009, last Thursday saw six men enter an enclosed room yesterday in Moscow to simulate a flight to Mars.
Revised: Following a similar experiment in 2009, last Thursday saw six men enter an enclosed room in Moscow to simulate a flight to Mars.
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Original:  During a similar experiment in 1999, a woman complainedthat the captain attempted to kiss her .
Revised:  During a similar experiment in 1999, the woman complained .
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Original:  During a similar experiment in 1999, the woman complained .
Revised:  During a similar experiment in 1999, a woman complained that the captain attempted to kiss her .
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Original:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden coached at Indiana Teacher's College (today :w: Indiana State University |Indiana State University ) in Terre Haute, Indiana, from 1946 to 1948.
Revised:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden coached at Indiana Teacher's College (today Indiana State University |Indiana State University ) in Terre Haute, Indiana, from 1946 to 1948.
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Original:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden coached at Indiana Teacher's College (today :w: Indiana State University |Indiana State University ) in Terre Haute, Indiana, from 1946 to 1948.
Revised:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden coached at Indiana Teacher's College (today :w: Indiana State University ) in Terre Haute, Indiana, from 1946 to 1948.
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Original:  In his long association with UCLA he won 620 games in 27 seasons and 10 NCAA titles during his last 12 seasons, including seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
Revised:  During his long association with UCLA he won 620 games in 27 seasons and 10 NCAA titles during his last 12 seasons, including seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
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Original:  He is also famous for his pyramid of success 
Revised:  Spurning a lucrative offer to coach the Los Angeles Lakers Wooden stepped down in 1975 following a final NCAA championship winning season. Following his retirement Wooden embarked in a second career as an motivational speaer and author, becoming known for his "Pyramid of success", a philosophy in which synergistic behaviours reinforce each other to create success in life and basketball. 
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Original: Wooden leaves behind a son James Hugh Wooden, and a daughter, Nancy Anne Muehlhausen.
Revised: Wooden leaves behind a son James Hugh Wooden, and daughter, Nancy Anne Muehlhausen.
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Original:  His wife Nellie (Nell) Riley , to whom he was utterly devoted even after her death from cancer, pre-deceased him in 1985 after 53 years of marriage
Revised:  His wife Nellie (Nell) Riley pre-deceased him in 1985 after 53 years of marriage
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Original:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden coached at  Indiana Teacher's College (today Indiana State University) in Terre Haute, Indiana, from 1946 to 1948.
Revised:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden first coached at Indiana Teacher's College (today Indiana State University) in Terre Haute, Indiana, from 1946 to 1948.
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Original:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden coached at  Indiana Teacher's College (today Indiana State University) in Terre Haute, Indiana, from 1946 to 1948.
Revised:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden coached at Indiana Teacher's College from 1946 to 1948.
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Original:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden coached at  Indiana Teacher's College (today Indiana State University) in Terre Haute, Indiana, from 1946 to 1948.
Revised:  After serving in the United States Navy as a lieutenant for three years in World War II, Wooden coached at Indiana Teacher's College (today Indiana State University) in Terre Haute, Indiana, from 1946 to 1948
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Original:  During his long association with UCLA he won 620 games in 27 seasons and 10 NCAA titles during his last 12 seasons, including  seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
Revised:  His 27 seasons and 10 NCAA titles during his last 12 seasons, including seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
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Original:  During his long association with UCLA he won 620 games in 27 seasons and 10 NCAA titles during his last 12 seasons, including  seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
Revised:  During his long association with UCLA he won 620 games in 27 seasons with UCLA culminated in 10 NCAA titles during his last 12 seasons, including seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
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Original:  During his long association with UCLA he won 620 games in 27 seasons and 10 NCAA titles during his last 12 seasons, including  seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
Revised:  During his long association with UCLA he won 620 games in 27 seasons and 10 NCAA titles in his last 12 seasons, including seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
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Original:  During his long association with UCLA he won 620 games in 27 seasons and 10 NCAA titles during his last 12 seasons, including  seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
Revised:  During his long association with UCLA he won 620 games in 27 seasons and 10 NCAA titles during his last 12 seasons, including a record seven in a row from 1967 to 1973.
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Original: Two MTR trains The MTR Corporation  has loosened their rules such that the  'non-disruptive' use of profanity is allowed in private conversations, and the punishment for inflammatory use of expletives is lowered from a fine of HK$5000 to HK$2000.
Revised: Two MTR trains The MTR Corporation has loosened their rules such that the 'non-disruptive' use of profanity in private conversations, and the punishment for inflammatory use of expletives is lowered from a fine of HK$5000 to HK$2000.
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Original:  The new set of rules have also excluded the regulation against wandering in MTR premises, as well as the rule against attempting to eat or drink .
Revised:  The new set of rules have also excluded the regulation against wandering in MTR premises, as well as the rule against attempting to eat or drink 
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Original: However, a new rule  outlaws the display of promotional material , so wearing a Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirt or pretending to be the Goddess of Democracy may breach the the MTR rules.
Revised: However, a new rule that outlaws the display of promotional material , so wearing a Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirt or pretending to be the Goddess of Democracy may breach the the MTR rules.
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Original: However, a new rule  outlaws the display of promotional material , so wearing a Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirt or pretending to be the Goddess of Democracy may breach the the MTR rules.
Revised: However, a new rule outlaws the display of promotional material . According to To, the wearing of Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirt or pretending to be the Goddess of Democracy may breach the the MTR rules.
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Original: However, a new rule  outlaws the display of promotional material , so wearing a Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirt or pretending to be the Goddess of Democracy may breach the the MTR rules.
Revised: However, a new rule outlaws the display of promotional material , so wearing a Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirts or acting the Goddess of Democracy may breach the the MTR rules.
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Original: However, a new rule  outlaws the display of promotional material , so wearing a Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirt or pretending to be the Goddess of Democracy may breach the the MTR rules.
Revised: However, a new rule outlaws the display of promotional material , so wearing a Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirt or pretending to be the Goddess of Democracy may breach the new MTR rules.
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Original:  Democratic Party member James To has expressed his concerns about this new rule.
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Original:  His main concern is whether the passenger will be allowed to buy the ticket rather than being fined HK$500.
Revised:  Her main concern is whether the passenger will be allowed to buy the ticket rather than being fined HK$500.
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