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Revised:  ] ] "I have pursued this appeal for all these years because I wanted all those people who worked for, and helped, the campaign in the 1970s to know that their support was justified," Davis said
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Original:  The court stopped short of ruling he was definitely innocent, leaving a prominent 1970s campaign that saw "George Davis is innocent - OK" graffiti daubed accross the city only partially vindicated.
Revised:  The court stopped short of ruling he was definitely innocent, leaving a prominent 1970s campaign that saw "George Davis is innocent - OK" graffiti daubed across the city only partially vindicated.
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Original:  He recieved twenty years imprisonment for wounding and armed robbery.
Revised:  He received twenty years imprisonment for wounding and armed robbery.
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Original:  The 1970s saw the slogan "George Davis is innocent - OK" written accross bridges and buildings around the capital, some of which remains today.
Revised:  The 1970s saw the slogan "George Davis is innocent - OK" written across bridges and buildings around the capital, some of which remains today.
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Original:  Reynolds had criticisms of the Robbery Squad, but said senior officers warned him not to obstruct in any way Davis's conviction . Robbery Squad was being led by , whose claim to fame is that he tracked down the .
Revised:  Reynolds had criticisms of the Robbery Squad, but said senior officers warned him not to obstruct Davis's conviction . Robbery Squad was being led by , whose claim to fame is that he tracked down the .
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Original:  Reynolds had criticisms of the Robbery Squad, but said senior officers warned him not to obstruct in any way Davis's conviction . Robbery Squad was being led by , whose claim to fame is that he tracked down the .
Revised:  Reynolds had criticisms of the Robbery Squad, but said senior officers warned him not to obstruct in any way Davis's conviction in any way. The Robbery Squad was being led by , whose claim to fame is that he tracked down the .
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Original: The World Summit on the Information Society, organized by the International Telecommunication Union, concluded on Friday evening, November 18th, in Tunis,  Tunisia.
Revised: The World Summit on the Information Society, organized by the International Telecommunication Union, concluded on Friday evening, November 18th, in Tunis, the capital of the north African nation of Tunisia.
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Original:  The event's organizers intended for the event to "put into motion" the plan for internet financing and governance developed at the 2003 WSIS summit in Geneva, Switzerland    ] ]
Revised:  The event's organizers intended for the event to "put into motion" the plan for internet financing and governance developed at the 2003 WSIS summit in Geneva, Switzerland . ] ]
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Original:  The event's organizers intended for the event to "put into motion" the plan for internet financing and governance developed at the 2003 WSIS summit in Geneva, Switzerland    ] ]
Revised:  The event's organizers intended for the event to "put into motion" the plan for internet financing and governance developed at the 2003 WSIS summit in Geneva, Switzerland B] ]
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Original:  The event's organizers intended for the event to "put into motion" the plan for internet financing and governance developed at the 2003 WSIS summit in Geneva, Switzerland    ] ]
Revised:  The event's organizers intended for the event to "put into motion" the plan for internet financing and governance developed at the 2003 WSIS summit in Geneva, Switzerland ] T]
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Original:  The event's organizers intended for the event to "put into motion" the plan for internet financing and governance developed at the 2003 WSIS summit in Geneva, Switzerland.
Revised:  The event's organizers intended for the event to "put into motion" the plan for Internet financing and governance developed at the 2003 WSIS summit in Geneva, Switzerland.
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Original:  A representative from the French organization Reporters Without Borders, Robert Menard, was prevented from deplaning from his Air France flight to Tunis to attend the summit.
Revised:  A representative from the French organization Reporters Without Borders, Robert Menard, was prevented from disembarking from his Air France flight to Tunis to attend the summit.
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Original: A representative from the French organization Reporters Without Borders, Robert Menard, was prevented from disembarking from his Air France flight to Tunis to attend the summit.
Revised: A representative from the French media watchdog Reporters Without Borders, Robert Menard, was prevented from disembarking from his Air France flight to Tunis to attend the summit.
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Original:  Nicholas Negroponte demonstrated the first working prototype of his $100 laptop.
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Original:  The interaction with the Tunisian police is related by Amanda Michel of the Berkman Center with the description from an attendee as, "[B]efore the break, a phalanx of secret police (ie scary guys in dark suits) showed up. [T]hey filled the hall outside the room, forcing cancellation of the break for fear that we'd not be allowed to re-start.  
Revised:  The interaction with the Tunisian police is related by Amanda Michel of the Berkman Center with the description from an attendee as, "[B]efore the break, a phalanx of secret police (ie scary guys in dark suits) showed up. [T]hey filled the hall outside the room, forcing cancellation of the break for fear that we'd not be allowed to re-start. " 
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Original: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers . " The  consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatization of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" , she said .
Revised: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers stating, " The consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatization of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" , she said .
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Original: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers . " The  consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatization of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" , she said .
Revised: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers . " t consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatization of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" , she said .
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Original: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers . " The  consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatization of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" , she said .
Revised: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers . " The he consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatization of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" , she said .
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Original: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers . " The  consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatization of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" , she said .
Revised: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers . " The consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatisation of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" , she said .
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Original: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers . " The  consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatization of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" , she said .
Revised: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political "demonizing" of these asylum seekers . " The consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being "flooded" by people who are "queue jumpers" has resulted in a stigmatization of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled" .
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Original:  In her six day trip to Australia, the UN Human Rights Commissioner visited two detention centres and said she was overwhelmed with the “grim despondency” of asylum seekers, many of whom wait over 18 months to have their case assessed.
Revised:  In her six-day trip to Australia, the UN Human Rights Commissioner visited two detention centres and said she was overwhelmed with the “grim despondency” of asylum seekers, many of whom wait over 18 months to have their case assessed.
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Original:  The mistreatment of refugees was today emulated with the release of an Australian Rights Commission report, which revealed extensive problems of self-harm and depression among detainees at the Villawood Detention Centre in Sydney
Revised:  The mistreatment of refugees was today reinforced with the release of an Australian Rights Commission report, which revealed extensive problems of self-harm and depression among detainees at the Villawood Detention Centre in Sydney
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Original: File photo of Navi Pillay in 2009 The United Nations Human Rights Commissioner has questioned Australia's tough asylum seeker policies this week, stating that Australia's mandatory detention regime has “ cast a shadow ” over its human rights record.
Revised: File photo of Navi Pillay in 2009 The United Nations Human Rights Commissioner has questioned Australia's tough asylum seeker policies this week, stating that Australia's mandatory detention regime has " cast a shadow ” over its human rights record.
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Original: File photo of Navi Pillay in 2009 The United Nations Human Rights Commissioner has questioned Australia's tough asylum seeker policies this week, stating that Australia's mandatory detention regime has “ cast a shadow ” over its human rights record.
Revised: File photo of Navi Pillay in 2009 The United Nations Human Rights Commissioner has questioned Australia's tough asylum seeker policies this week, stating that Australia's mandatory detention regime has “ cast a shadow " over its human rights record.
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Original:  In an interview with the ABC, Ms Pillay voiced concern over this, stating that Australia may “ violate refugee law ” by sending asylum seekers to a country where no laws are in place to protect them.
Revised:  In an interview with the ABC, Ms Pillay voiced concern over this, stating that Australia may " violate refugee law ” by sending asylum seekers to a country where no laws are in place to protect them.
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Original:  In an interview with the ABC, Ms Pillay voiced concern over this, stating that Australia may “ violate refugee law ” by sending asylum seekers to a country where no laws are in place to protect them.
Revised:  In an interview with the ABC, Ms Pillay voiced concern over this, stating that Australia may “ violate refugee law " by sending asylum seekers to a country where no laws are in place to protect them.
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Original:  In her six-day trip to Australia, the UN Human Rights Commissioner visited two detention centres and said she was overwhelmed with the “grim despondency” of asylum seekers, many of whom wait over 18 months to have their case assessed.
Revised:  In her six-day trip to Australia, the UN Human Rights Commissioner visited two detention centres and said she was overwhelmed with the "grim despondency" of asylum seekers, many of whom wait over 18 months to have their case assessed.
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Original: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political " demonizing " of these asylum seekers stating, "[t]he consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being 'flooded' by people who are 'queue jumpers' has resulted in a stigmatisation of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled".
Revised: Pillay, a South African former anti-apartheid protester, also voiced distress over the omnipresence of political " demonising " of these asylum seekers stating, "[t]he consequence of the constant political refrain that Australia is being 'flooded' by people who are 'queue jumpers' has resulted in a stigmatisation of an entire group of people, irrespective of where they have come from or what dangers they have fled".
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Original:  In her six-day trip to Australia, the UN Human Rights Commissioner visited two detention centres and said she was overwhelmed with the "grim despondency" of asylum seekers, many of whom wait over 18 months to have their case assessed .
Revised:  In her six-day trip to Australia, the UN Human Rights Commissioner visited two detention centres and said she was overwhelmed with the "grim despondency" of asylum seekers, many of whom wait over 18 months to have their case assessed 
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Original:  The mistreatment of refugees was today reinforced with the release of an Australian Rights Commission report, which revealed extensive problems of self-harm and depression among detainees at the Villawood Detention Centre in Sydney
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Original: In her six-day trip to Australia, the UN Human Rights Commissioner visited two detention centres and said she was overwhelmed with the "grim despondency" of asylum seekers, many of whom wait over 18 months to have their case assessed .
Revised: In her six-day trip to Australia, the UN Human Rights Commissioner visited two detention centres and said she was overwhelmed with the "grim despondency" of asylum seekers, many of whom wait over 18 months to have their case assessed 
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Original:   Articles Heavy Lift Delta IV Rocket Launch Problems January 8, 2005
Revised:  Experimental Format Articles Heavy Lift Delta IV Rocket Launch Problems January 8, 2005
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Original:  Japan promises 500,000,000 USD January 1, 2005 Nearly 2 billion USD promised, U.N. warns of logistic bottleneck 
Revised:  Japan promises 500,000,000 USD January 1, 2005 Nearly 2 billion USD promised, U.N. warns of logistic bottlenecks. 
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Original:  The United States military has begun to withdraw troops from Pakistan after explicit governmental pressure to have a smaller presence in the wake of Osama bin Laden ’ s death.
Revised:  The United States military has begun to withdraw troops from Pakistan after explicit governmental pressure to have a smaller presence in the wake of Osama bin Laden ' s death.
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Original:  In the days following the raid Pakistan ’ s army chief, General Ashfaq Kayani , said that any comparable raids in Pakistani in the future would lead to a re-evaluation of the nation’s military and political collaboration with the US.
Revised:  In the days following the raid Pakistan ' s army chief, General Ashfaq Kayani , said that any comparable raids in Pakistani in the future would lead to a re-evaluation of the nation’s military and political collaboration with the US.
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Original:  In the days following the raid Pakistan ’ s army chief, General Ashfaq Kayani , said that any comparable raids in Pakistani in the future would lead to a re-evaluation of the nation’s military and political collaboration with the US.
Revised:  In the days following the raid Pakistan ’ s army chief, General , said that any comparable raids in Pakistani in the future would lead to a re-evaluation of the nation’s military and political collaboration with the US.
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Original: Pakistan's army chief General The United States military has begun to withdraw troops from Pakistan after explicit governmental pressure to have a smaller presence in the wake of Osama bin Laden's death.
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Original:  Pentagon spokesperson David Lapan said that official sources from the Pakistani capital of Islamabad requested a scaling down of the American 200 to 300 troop strong occupation on Wednesday, May 25.
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Original:  Pentagon spokesperson David Lapan said that official sources from the Pakistani capital of Islamabad requested a scaling down of the American 200 to 300 troop strong occupation on Wednesday, May 25.
Revised:  Pentagon spokesperson David Lapan said that official sources from the Pakistani capital of Islamabad requested a scaling down of the American 200 to 300 troops, on Wednesday.
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Original:  The majority of the US presence  is comprised of Special Forces troops, who train, prepare and give advice to Pakistani soldiers as part of a wider effort to counter Islamist fighter and terrorist groups, such as al-Qaeda . Mr. Lapan did not specify exactly how many troops would be leaving  .
Revised:  The majority of the US presence is comprised of Special Forces troops, who train, prepare and give advice to Pakistani soldiers as part of a wider effort to counter Islamist fighter and terrorist groups, such as . Mr. Lapan did not specify exactly how many troops would be leaving .
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Original:  The impending withdrawal of troops highlights the tensions between the US and Pakistan in the wake of the American raid on bin Laden’s Abbottabad home, resulting in the death of America ’ s most wanted terrorist.
Revised:  The impending withdrawal of troops highlights the tensions between the US and Pakistan in the wake of the American raid on bin Laden’s Abbottabad home, resulting in the death of America ' s most wanted terrorist.
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Original:  In the days following the raid Pakistan's army chief, General , said that any comparable raids in Pakistani in the future would lead to a re-evaluation of the nation ’ s military and political collaboration with the US.
Revised:  In the days following the raid Pakistan's army chief, General , said that any comparable raids in Pakistan in the future would lead to a re-evaluation of the nation ’ s military and political collaboration with the US.
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Original:  In the days following the raid Pakistan's army chief, General , said that any comparable raids in Pakistani in the future would lead to a re-evaluation of the nation ’ s military and political collaboration with the US.
Revised:  In the days following the raid Pakistan's army chief, General , said that any comparable raids in Pakistani in the future would lead to a re-evaluation of the nation ' s military and political collaboration with the US.
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Original:  He also told his commanders of the desire to have the numbers of American troops in Pakistan be brought down to "the minimum level "
Revised:  He also told his commanders of the desire to have the numbers of American troops in Pakistan be brought down to "the minimum level .
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Original:  Prior to this announcement, concerns within Pakistan have been raised about whether the attack violated Pakistan's sovereignty, and some lawmakers have called for a review of Pakistani — US relations.
Revised:  Prior to this announcement, concerns within Pakistan have been raised about whether the attack violated Pakistan's sovereignty, and some lawmakers have called for a review of Pakistani – US relations.
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Original: BREAKING NEWS Police in Thailand say two bombs have exploded in the Muslim majority south of the country, wounding 12 people.
Revised:  Police in Thailand say two bombs have exploded in the Muslim majority south of the country, wounding 12 people.
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Original:  Two bombs on Sunday exploded almost simultaneously in Thailand's restive Muslim-majority south, wounding at least 12 people including a Malaysian tourist, police said.
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Original:  More than 1,000 people have been killed in Thailand's three southern provinces since January 2004. 
Revised:  More than 1,000 deaths since January 2004. 
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Original:  The area remains under Martial law which was recently extended to some areas of neighbouring Songkla Province The three southernmost provincesof Thailand -- Yala, Pattani and Narathiwat -- are the only Muslim-majority areas in Thailand .
Revised:  The area remains under Martial law which was recently extended to some areas of neighbouring Songkla Province . Neigbouring provinces, Yala, Pattani and Narathiwat -- are the only Muslim-majority areas in Thailand .
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Original:  The area remains under Martial law which was recently extended to some areas of neighbouring Songkla Province The three southernmost provincesof Thailand -- Yala, Pattani and Narathiwat -- are the only Muslim-majority areas in Thailand .
Revised:  The area remains under Martial law which was recently extended to some areas of neighbouring Songkla Province The three southernmost provincesof Thailand -- Yala, Pattani , and Narathiwat are the only Muslim-majority areas in Thailand .
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Original:  The area remains under Martial law which was recently extended to some areas of neighbouring Songkla Province The three southernmost provincesof Thailand -- Yala, Pattani and Narathiwat -- are the only Muslim-majority areas in Thailand .
Revised:  The area remains under Martial law which was recently extended to some areas of neighbouring Songkla Province The three southernmost provincesof Thailand -- Yala, Pattani and Narathiwat -- are the only Muslim-majority part of the traditionally Buddhist country .
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Original:  Over 1, 100 people have been killed in an Islamic separatist insurgency that has wracked the region since early 2004. (AP) Last week a former militant and his eight family members were gunned down in a revenge attack in Narathiwat .
Revised:  Last week a former militant and his eight family members were gunned down in a revenge attack in Narathiwat .
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Original:  Neigbouring provinces, Yala, Pattani, and Narathiwat  are the only Muslim-majority part of the traditionally Buddhist country.
Revised:  The provinces, Yala, Pattani, and Narathiwat are the only Muslim-majority part of the traditionally Buddhist country.
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