wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  According to the Associated Press, neighborhood residents view The Oprah Winfrey Show as, "a reminder of what has been, and what could be lost."
Revised:  According to the Associated Press, citizens view The Oprah Winfrey Show as, "a reminder of what has been, and what could be lost."
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Original:  For the first ten years she competed with other talk shows by discussing relationships and paralleled subjects.
Revised:  For the first ten years she competed with other talk shows by discussing relationships and parallel subjects.
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Original:  Harpo Productions' surrounding neighborhood was less than savory prior to the company's founding.
Revised:  The surrounding neighborhood of Harpo Productions was rundown prior to the company's founding.
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Original:  She made the announcement on Friday's broadcast of The Oprah Winfrey Show.
Revised:  Winfrey made the announcement on Friday's broadcast of The Oprah Winfrey Show.
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Original:  Winfrey suppressed tearsas she explained that careful thought and prayer had gone into her decision.
Revised:  Suppressing tears, she explained that careful thought and prayer had gone into her decision.
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Original:  In the late 1990s her show changed focus to incorporate  spirituality and human interest stories .
Revised:  In the late 1990s her show changed focus to incorporate stories relating to spirituality and human interest stories .
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Original:  In the late 1990s her show changed focus to incorporate  spirituality and human interest stories .
Revised:  In the late 1990s her show changed focus to incorporate spirituality and human interest .
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Original:  The news agency Xinhua said that 528 workers were in the mine, located in the Heilongjiang province, when the explosion occurred at about 02.30 local time (18.30 UTC).
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Original: In recognition for the discovery of the Higgs Boson and Higgs mechanism, the American Physical Society has awarded the 2010 J. J. Sakurai Prize for Theoretical Particle Physics to Drs.
Revised: The American Physical Society has awarded the 2010 J. J. Sakurai Prize for Theoretical Particle Physics to Drs.
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Original: In recognition for the discovery of the Higgs Boson and Higgs mechanism, the American Physical Society has awarded the 2010 J. J. Sakurai Prize for Theoretical Particle Physics to Drs.
Revised: In recognition for the discovery of the Higgs Boson and Higgs mechanism, the American Physical Society has awarded its 2010 J. J. Sakurai Prize for Theoretical Particle Physics to Drs.
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Original:  G. S. Guralnik, Brown University ;
Revised:  G. S. Guralnik, Brown University 
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Original:  Tom Kibble, Imperial College London ;
Revised:  Tom Kibble, Imperial College London 
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Original:  Robert Brout, Université Libre de Bruxelles ;
Revised:  Robert Brout, Université Libre de Bruxelles 
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Original:  and Peter Higgs, University of Edinburgh, Emeritus .
Revised:  and Peter Higgs, University of Edinburgh, Emeritus 
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Original:  The mechanism is the key element of the electroweak theory that forms part of the standard model of particle physics, and of many models , such as the Grand Unified Theory, that go beyond it.
Revised:  The mechanism is the key element of the electroweak theory that forms part of the Standard Model of particle physics, and of many models , such as the Grand Unified Theory, that go beyond it.
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Original:  The mechanism is the key element of the electroweak theory that forms part of the standard model of particle physics, and of many models , such as the Grand Unified Theory, that go beyond it.
Revised:  The mechanism is the key element of the electroweak theory that forms part of the standard model of particle physics, and of many models that go beyond it.
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Original:  The papers that introduce this mechanism were published in  Physical Review Letters in 1964 and were each recognized as milestone papers by PRL’s 50th anniversary celebration.
Revised:  The papers that introduce this mechanism were published in the journal Physical Review Letters in 1964 and were each recognized as milestone papers by PRL’s 50th anniversary celebration.
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Original:  Presently, Fermilab's Tevatron and the Large Hadron Collider at CERN  are searching for a particle  that will constitute evidence for this significant discovery.
Revised:  The Large Hadron Collider at CERN are searching for a particle that will constitute evidence for this significant discovery.
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Original:  The Large Hadron Collider , a vast scientific experiment to smash together sub-atomic particles,  moved a step closer to its goal tonight.
Revised:  The Large Hadron Collider , a vast scientific experiment to smash together sub-atomic particles, recently moved a step closer to its goal tonight.
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Original:  Physicists announced they had sent protons all the way round the 27 km ring beneath the France–Switzerland border, for the first time since a major failure 14 months ago
Revised:  Physicists announced they had sent protons all the way round the 27 km ring beneath the France–Switzerland border, for the first time since a major failure 14 months 
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Original:  This follows a major setback which shut down the collider for 14 months  
Revised:  This follows a major setback which shut down the collider for 14 months . 
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Original:  Germany fell to sixth place, having won only one silver medal  .
Revised:  Germany fell to sixth place, having won only one silver medal on the day .
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Original:  Fellow Russian Vitaliy Obotin finished first in the men's 200m , setting a new European record of 2:07.37 in the process and beating out the next closer swimmer , Trishkin, by almost 5 seconds.
Revised:  Fellow Russian Vitaliy Obotin finished first in the men's 200m , setting a new European record in the process and beating out the next closer swimmer , Trishkin, by almost 5 seconds.
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Original: An Iraqi parliament session aimed at resolving a deadlock on an electoral law required for general elections in January has ended without agreement today .
Revised: An Iraqi parliament session aimed at resolving deadlock on electoral law required for general elections in January has ended without agreement today .
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Original: An Iraqi parliament session aimed at resolving a deadlock on an electoral law required for general elections in January has ended without agreement today .
Revised: An Iraqi parliament session aimed at resolving a deadlock on an electoral law required for general elections in January ended without agreement today .
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Original:  Iraqi lawmakers had been expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political blocs . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," said parliament speaker Iyad al-Samarrai to reporters . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law likely will delay the Januaryelection
Revised:  Lawmakers were expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political blocs . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," said parliament speaker Iyad al-Samarrai to reporters . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law likely will delay the Januaryelection
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Original:  Iraqi lawmakers had been expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political blocs . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," said parliament speaker Iyad al-Samarrai to reporters . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law likely will delay the Januaryelection
Revised:  Iraqi lawmakers had been expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political factions . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," said parliament speaker Iyad al-Samarrai to reporters . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law likely will delay the Januaryelection
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Original:  Iraqi lawmakers had been expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political blocs . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," said parliament speaker Iyad al-Samarrai to reporters . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law likely will delay the Januaryelection
Revised:  Iraqi lawmakers had been expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political blocs . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," parliamentary speaker Iyad al-Samarrai to reporters . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law likely will delay the Januaryelection
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Original:  Iraqi lawmakers had been expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political blocs . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," said parliament speaker Iyad al-Samarrai to reporters . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law likely will delay the Januaryelection
Revised:  Iraqi lawmakers had been expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political blocs . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," said parliament speaker Iyad al-Samarrai told the press yesterday . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law likely will delay the Januaryelection
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Original:  Iraqi lawmakers had been expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political blocs . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," said parliament speaker Iyad al-Samarrai to reporters . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law likely will delay the Januaryelection
Revised:  Iraqi lawmakers had been expected to vote on the much-delayed law, but parliamentary officials said the proceeding was delayed until Sunday in hope of finding a solution acceptable to all political blocs . "The vote is postponed until tomorrow," said parliament speaker Iyad al-Samarrai to reporters . Members of Iraq's electoral commission say the deadlock over the election law will probably delay January's elections
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Original: Sayyaf is an member of parliament from the Kabul province, and a former warlord.
Revised: Sayyaf is an MP from the Kabul province, and a former warlord.
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Original:  Five bodyguards, however, were killed . Sayyaf was one of the ex-mujahideen leaders who fought against the Taliban in the mid-1990s.
Revised:  Five bodyguards, however, died . Sayyaf was one of the ex-mujahideen leaders who fought against the Taliban in the mid-1990s.
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Original:  He became a strong supporter of Afghan President Hamid Karzai's government and the international forces after the US-led invasion in 2001.
Revised:  He became a strong supporter of Afghan President Hamid Karzai's government and the international forces after the United States-led invasion in 2001.
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Original: The Australian Football League (AFL) yesterday announced that it would hold an exhibition game in Shnghai , China.
Revised: The Australian Football League (AFL) yesterday announced that it would hold an exhibition game in Shanghai , China.
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Original:  AFL game development head David Matthews told reporters, " There  are big opportunities here [in China] to improve our broadcast position and consider China as an events market.
Revised:  AFL game development head David Matthews told reporters, " t are big opportunities here [in China] to improve our broadcast position and consider China as an events market.
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Original:  AFL game development head David Matthews told reporters, " There  are big opportunities here [in China] to improve our broadcast position and consider China as an events market.
Revised:  AFL game development head David Matthews told reporters, " There here are big opportunities here [in China] to improve our broadcast position and consider China as an events market.
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Original: Nathalie Blanchard 's alleges that Manulife Financial allegedly cut off her long-term benefit payments because she was "available to work, because of Facebook."
Revised: Nathalie Blanchard alleges that Manulife Financial allegedly cut off her long-term benefit payments because she was "available to work, because of Facebook."
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Original: Nathalie Blanchard alleges that Manulife Financial allegedly cut off her long-term benefit payments because she was "available to work, because of Facebook."
Revised: Nathalie Blanchard alleges that Manulife Financial cut off her long-term benefit payments because she was "available to work, because of Facebook."
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Original: Pictures posted included Blanchard and others at at her birthday party strip tease  , among various private photos taken while on vacation.
Revised: Pictures posted included Blanchard and others at her birthday party strip tease , among various private photos taken while on vacation.
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Original:  Blanchard was previously employed at IBM 
Revised:  Blanchard was previously employed at IBM .
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Original: Indonesian transportation officials say four people were killed and another 292 were rescued Sunday  after a ferry sank in rough waters near Sumatra island.
Revised: Indonesian transportation officials say four people were killed and another 292 were rescued Sunday , after a ferry sank in rough waters near Sumatra island.
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Original:  He said the large disparity between reality and the manifest was a "classic case" of breaking regulations.
Revised:  Sunaryo said the large disparity between reality and the manifest was a "classic case" of breaking regulations.
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Original:  Officials say the Dumai Express 10 was sailing from Batam island to Riau province Sunday morning when it sank.
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Original:  Around 800 people have been killed in ferry accidents in Indonesia over the past three years, including at least 232 in an accident off Sulawesi in January this year  
Revised:  Around 800 people have been killed in ferry accidents in Indonesia over the past three years, including at least 232 in an accident off Sulawesi in January this year . 
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Original: Sunaryo,  director-general of sea transport, said the ferry's capacity was 273 people, and only 213 passengers were on the manifest, but one official put the number rescued at 292.
Revised: Sunaryo, the director-general of sea transport, said the ferry's capacity was 273 people, and only 213 passengers were on the manifest, but one official put the number rescued at 292.
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Original: According to initial reports by TGIF Newspaper and  Watt's Up With That blog, hundreds of emails and documents were made available from a FTP site on a Russian server with an accompanying statement: Some journalists suppose that this event can be a consequence of increased attention on CRU after it has played a substantial role in  IPCC fourth accessment report (2007).
Revised: According to initial reports by TGIF Newspaper and the Watt's Up With That blog, hundreds of emails and documents were made available from a FTP site on a Russian server with an accompanying statement: Some journalists suppose that this event can be a consequence of increased attention on CRU after it has played a substantial role in IPCC fourth accessment report (2007).
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Original: According to initial reports by TGIF Newspaper and  Watt's Up With That blog, hundreds of emails and documents were made available from a FTP site on a Russian server with an accompanying statement: Some journalists suppose that this event can be a consequence of increased attention on CRU after it has played a substantial role in  IPCC fourth accessment report (2007).
Revised: According to initial reports by TGIF Newspaper and Watt's Up With That blog, hundreds of emails and documents were made available from a FTP site on a Russian server with an accompanying statement: Some journalists suppose that this event is a consequence of increased attention on CRU after it has played a substantial role in IPCC fourth accessment report (2007).
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Original: According to initial reports by TGIF Newspaper and  Watt's Up With That blog, hundreds of emails and documents were made available from a FTP site on a Russian server with an accompanying statement: Some journalists suppose that this event can be a consequence of increased attention on CRU after it has played a substantial role in  IPCC fourth accessment report (2007).
Revised: According to initial reports by TGIF Newspaper and Watt's Up With That blog, hundreds of emails and documents were made available from a FTP site on a Russian server with an accompanying statement: Some journalists suppose that this event can be a consequence of increased attention on CRU after it played a substantial role in IPCC fourth accessment report (2007).
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Original: According to initial reports by TGIF Newspaper and  Watt's Up With That blog, hundreds of emails and documents were made available from a FTP site on a Russian server with an accompanying statement: Some journalists suppose that this event can be a consequence of increased attention on CRU after it has played a substantial role in  IPCC fourth accessment report (2007).
Revised: According to initial reports by TGIF Newspaper and Watt's Up With That blog, hundreds of emails and documents were made available from a FTP site on a Russian server with an accompanying statement: Some journalists suppose that this event can be a consequence of increased attention on CRU after it has played a substantial role in the IPCC fourth accessment report (2007).
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Original:  A 62 megabyte zip file, containing around 160 megabytes of emails, pdfs and other documents , has been confirmed as genuine by the head of the University of East Anglia’s Climate Research Unit, Dr Phillip Jones.
Revised:  A 62 megabyte zip file, containing around 160 megabytes of emails, pdfs and other documents . Some of the contents have been confirmed as genuine by the head of the University of East Anglia’s Climate Research Unit, Dr Phillip Jones.
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Original:  The material remained unpublished because of the researchers' fear of skepticism of oppositionists of climate change.
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Original:  A university spokesman states that the data that was published without permission does not confirm whether all of the published communication is genuine: The release of the documents comes just weeks before a big climate-change summit in Copenhagen, Denmark, meant to lay the groundwork for a new global treaty to curb greenhouse-gas emissions and fight climate change
Revised:  A university spokesman stated that data was published without permission does not confirm whether all of the published communication is genuine: The release of the documents comes just weeks before a big climate-change summit in Copenhagen, Denmark, meant to lay the groundwork for a new global treaty to curb greenhouse-gas emissions and fight climate change
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Original:  A university spokesman states that the data that was published without permission does not confirm whether all of the published communication is genuine: The release of the documents comes just weeks before a big climate-change summit in Copenhagen, Denmark, meant to lay the groundwork for a new global treaty to curb greenhouse-gas emissions and fight climate change
Revised:  A university spokesman states that the data that was published without permission , but did not confirm whether all of the published communication is genuine: The release of the documents comes just weeks before a big climate-change summit in Copenhagen, Denmark, meant to lay the groundwork for a new global treaty to curb greenhouse-gas emissions and fight climate change
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Original:  A university spokesman states that the data that was published without permission does not confirm whether all of the published communication is genuine: The release of the documents comes just weeks before a big climate-change summit in Copenhagen, Denmark, meant to lay the groundwork for a new global treaty to curb greenhouse-gas emissions and fight climate change
Revised:  A university spokesman states that the data that was published without permission does not confirm whether all of the published communication is genuine: The release of the documents comes just weeks before a major climate-change summit in Copenhagen, Denmark, meant to lay the groundwork for a new global treaty to curb greenhouse-gas emissions and fight climate change
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Original: In a press release by the University of East Anglia, Dr. Jones stated that: "     My colleagues and I accept that some of the published emails do not read well.
Revised: In a press release by the University of East Anglia, Dr. Jones stated that: " " My colleagues and I accept that some of the published emails do not read well.
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Original: In a press release by the University of East Anglia, Dr. Jones stated that: "     My colleagues and I accept that some of the published emails do not read well.
Revised: In a press release by the University of East Anglia, Dr. Jones stated that: " ... My colleagues and I accept that some of the published emails do not read well.
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Original:  In an interview with TGIF Newspaper, he stated that a breach of security had taken place and that a large quantity of files had been stolen .
Revised:  In an interview with TGIF Newspaper, he stated that a breach of security had taken place and that a large quantity of files had been "stolen" .
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Original:  Randolph J Bresnik in his pre-launch publicity photo.
Revised: Pre-launch publicity photo of astronaut Randolph J Bresnik in his pre-launch publicity photo.
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Original:  Randolph J Bresnik in his pre-launch publicity photo.
Revised:  Randolph J Bresnik .
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Original:  Lieutenant Colonel Randolph J Bresnik became only the second ever man to become a father whilst in space, the first being Astronaut Mike Fincke in 2004.
Revised:  Lieutenant Colonel Randolph J Bresnik became only the second man to have become a father whilst in space, the first being Astronaut Mike Fincke in 2004.
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Original:  Lieutenant Colonel Randolph J Bresnik became only the second ever man to become a father whilst in space, the first being Astronaut Mike Fincke in 2004.
Revised:  Lieutenant Colonel Randolph J Bresnik became only the second ever man to become a father while in space.
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