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Original:  The Spirit responded when teammates Patrick McNeil and Matt Corrente regained the lead for Saginaw, making the score 6-5.
Revised:  The Spirit responded when teammates Patrick McNeil and Matt Corrente regained the lead for Saginaw, 6-5.
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Original:  With only a few minutes remaining, Ottawa pulled their goalie from net to gain a man advantage.
Revised:  With only minutes remaining, Ottawa pulled their goalie from net to gain a man advantage.
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Original:  The Spirit team remains in second position for their West division, behind the Plymouth Whalers.
Revised:  The Spirit team maintains second position for their West division, behind the Plymouth Whalers.
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Original:  The 67's are currently fourth in their East division
Revised:  The 67's are currently fourth in the East division
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Original: Pakistani tribesmen numbering in the thousands protested and some set fire to the office of a U.S. related agency as the people and government of Pakistan expressed their anger over U.S. attacks upon Pakistani civilians along the frontier.
Revised: Pakistani tribesmen numbering in the thousands protested and some set fire to the office of a US related agency as the people and government of Pakistan expressed their anger over U.S. attacks upon Pakistani civilians along the frontier.
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Original: Pakistani tribesmen numbering in the thousands protested and some set fire to the office of a U.S. related agency as the people and government of Pakistan expressed their anger over U.S. attacks upon Pakistani civilians along the frontier.
Revised: Pakistani tribesmen numbering in the thousands protested and some set fire to the office of a U.S. related agency as the people and government of Pakistan expressed their anger over US attacks upon Pakistani civilians along the frontier.
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Original:  Liaqat Baluch, a lawmaker from Mutahida Majlis-e-Amal, said "We demand that Pervez Musharraf resign and American troops vacate all parts of Pakistan and go out of Afghanistan and Iraq." and Sahibzada Haroon ur Rashid, a lawmaker from a hardline Islamic party, called the attack "open terrorism 
Revised:  Liaqat Baluch, a lawmaker from Mutahida Majlis-e-Amal, said "We demand that Pervez Musharraf resign and American troops vacate all parts of Pakistan and go out of Afghanistan and Iraq." and Sahibzada Haroon ur Rashid, a lawmaker from a hardline Islamic party, called the attack "open terrorism .
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Original: Pakistani tribesmen numbering in the thousands protested and some set fire to the office of a US related agency as the people and government of Pakistan  expressed their anger over US attacks upon Pakistani civilians along the frontier.
Revised: Pakistani tribesmen numbering in the thousands protested and some set fire to the office of a U.S. related agency as the people and government of Pakistan expressed their anger over US attacks upon Pakistani civilians along the frontier.
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Original: Pakistani tribesmen numbering in the thousands protested and some set fire to the office of a US related agency as the people and government of Pakistan  expressed their anger over US attacks upon Pakistani civilians along the frontier.
Revised: Pakistani tribesmen numbering in the thousands protested and some set fire to the office of a US related agency as the people and government of Pakistan expressed their anger over U.S. attacks on Pakistani civilians along the frontier.
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Original:  Pakistan's Information Minister  Sheikh Rashid Ahmed  said the attack was "highly condemnable" and that his government wanted "to assure the people we will not allow such incidents to reoccur."
Revised:  Pakistan's Information Minister , Sheikh Rashid Ahmed said the attack was "highly condemnable" and that his government wanted "to assure the people we will not allow such incidents to reoccur."
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Original:  Pakistan's Information Minister  Sheikh Rashid Ahmed  said the attack was "highly condemnable" and that his government wanted "to assure the people we will not allow such incidents to reoccur."
Revised:  Pakistan's Information Minister Sheikh Rashid Ahmed , said the attack was "highly condemnable" and that his government wanted "to assure the people we will not allow such incidents to reoccur."
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Original:  Liaqat Baluch, a lawmaker from Mutahida Majlis-e-Amal, said "We demand that Pervez Musharraf resign and American troops vacate all parts of Pakistan and go out of Afghanistan and Iraq." and Sahibzada Haroon ur Rashid, a lawmaker from a hardline Islamic party, called the attack "open terrorism.  
Revised:  Liaqat Baluch, a lawmaker from Mutahida Majlis-e-Amal, said "We demand that Pervez Musharraf resign and American troops vacate all parts of Pakistan and go out of Afghanistan and Iraq." Sahibzada Haroon ur Rashid, a lawmaker from a hardline Islamic party, called the attack "open terrorism. 
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Original:  Liaqat Baluch, a lawmaker from Mutahida Majlis-e-Amal, said "We demand that Pervez Musharraf resign and American troops vacate all parts of Pakistan and go out of Afghanistan and Iraq." and Sahibzada Haroon ur Rashid, a lawmaker from a hardline Islamic party, called the attack "open terrorism.  
Revised:  Liaqat Baluch, a lawmaker from Mutahida Majlis-e-Amal, said "We demand that Pervez Musharraf resign and American troops vacate all parts of Pakistan and go out of Afghanistan and Iraq." and Sahibzada Haroon ur Rashid, a lawmaker from a hardline Islamic party, called the attack "open terrorism. " 
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Original:  The dust then will be looked at under a microscope to be examined and because this comet is nearly 5 billion years old, they hope it will unlock some of the secrets to the formation of out galaxy and universe.
Revised:  The dust then will be looked at under a microscope to be examined and because this comet is nearly 5 billion years old, they hope it will unlock some of the secrets to the formation of our galaxy and universe.
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Original:  "The tiny particles that the Stardust mission is bringing back are the most scientifically exciting and technically challenging material that we have ever had the opportunity to study," said Monica Grady of the Planetary and Space Science Research Institute (PSSRI).%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When the landing was complete, it drew cheers from excited scientists.
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Original:  "The tiny particles that the Stardust mission is bringing back are the most scientifically exciting and technically challenging material that we have ever had the opportunity to study," said Monica Grady of the Planetary and Space Science Research Institute (PSSRI).%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When the landing was complete, it drew cheers from excited scientists.
Revised:  "The tiny particles that the Stardust mission is bringing back are the most scientifically exciting and technically challenging material that we have ever had the opportunity to study," said Monica Grady of the Planetary and Space Science Research Institute (PSSRI).%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  "It's an absolutely fantastic end to the mission," said Carlton Allen of NASA's Johnson Space Center.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 2004, another collector capsule from another spacecraft, Genesis, which collected solar wind particles crashed into the Utah desert, however, the samples did not survive.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The capsule also brought back with it 72 black-and-white pictures showing broad mesas, craters, pinnacles and canyons with flat floors on the surface of Wild 2, which was a staggering 500 million miles from Earth at the time Stardust was launched.
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Original: "All stations, we have touchdown," an announcer declared.
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Original:  An infrared camera captures the Stardust sample return capsule as it descends to the Utah Test and Training Range.
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Original: The capsules speed when it was going through Earth's atmosphere was a record breaking 29,000 mph, making it the fastest man-man probe to return to Earth.
Revised: The capsules speed when it was going through Earth's atmosphere was a record breaking 29,000 mph, making it the fastest man-made probe to return to Earth.
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Original:  In the end,  magnificent achievement for NASA and science in general.
Revised:  In the end, a magnificent achievement for NASA and science in general.
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Original: Thousands of Pakistanis have taken to the streets  to demonstrate against the U.S. air strike of a village on the border of Afghanistan that took place yesterday .
Revised: Many Pakistanis took to the streets to demonstrate against the U.S. air strike of a village on the border of Afghanistan that took place yesterday .
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Original: Thousands of Pakistanis have taken to the streets  to demonstrate against the U.S. air strike of a village on the border of Afghanistan that took place yesterday .
Revised: Thousands of Pakistanis have taken to the streets to demonstrate against the U.S. air strike of a village on the border of Afghanistan .
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Original:  The main demonstration took place in the city of w:Karachi| , where protestors shouted "Death to American Aggression" and "Stop bombing innocent people", a BBC report claims.
Revised:  The main demonstration took place in the city of Karachi , where protestors shouted "Death to American Aggression" and "Stop bombing innocent people", a BBC report claims.
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Original:  A rally also took place in the town of Samarbagh, where over 600 people came out to protest, according to the Aljazeera news network.
Revised:  rally also took place in the town of Samarbagh, where over 600 people came out to protest, according to the Aljazeera news network.
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Original:  The US has so far not commented on the attack.
Revised:  The US has not yet commented on the attack.
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Original: A tracheotomy is a procedure which an incision in the windpipe that forms a temporary or permanent opening, will replace a tube now lodged in the throat of Sharon who suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
Revised: A tracheotomy is a procedure which an incision in the windpipe that forms a temporary or permanent opening, and will replacethe tube now lodged in the throat of Sharon who suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
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Original:  A tracheotomy is usually performed on many stroke victims to reduce the risk of infection posed by intubation.
Revised:  A tracheotomy is routinely performed on stroke victims to reduce the risk of infection posed by intubation.
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Original: A tracheotomy is a procedure which an incision in the windpipe that forms a temporary or permanent opening, and will replacethe tube now lodged in the throat of Sharon who suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
Revised: A tracheotomy is a procedure which an incision in the windpipe that forms a temporary or permanent opening, and will replace the tube now lodged in the throat of Sharon who suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
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Original: A tracheotomy is a procedure which an incision in the windpipe that forms a temporary or permanent opening , and will replace the tube now lodged in the throatof Sharon who suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
Revised: A tracheotomy is a procedure where an incision in the windpipe that forms a temporary or permanent opening , and will replace the tube now lodged in the throatof Sharon who suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
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Original: A tracheotomy is a procedure which an incision in the windpipe that forms a temporary or permanent opening , and will replace the tube now lodged in the throatof Sharon who suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
Revised: A tracheotomy is a procedure which an incision in the windpipe is made to create a temporary or permanent opening , and will replace the tube now lodged in the throatof Sharon who suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
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Original: A tracheotomy is a procedure which an incision in the windpipe that forms a temporary or permanent opening , and will replace the tube now lodged in the throatof Sharon who suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
Revised: A tracheotomy is a procedure which an incision in the windpipe that forms a temporary or permanent opening . It will allow for the removal of the breathing tube now inserted in Sharon's throat. Sharon suffered a major stroke on January 4, 2006.
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Original:  Last week, doctors said the plastic tube connecting his windpipe with the respirator will start to cause him damage if they leave it in for too long.
Revised:  Last week, doctors said the plastic tube connecting his windpipe with the respirator would start to cause him damage if they leave it in for too long.
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Original:  Last week, doctors said the plastic tube connecting his windpipe with the respirator will start to cause him damage if they leave it in for too long.
Revised:  Last week, doctors said the plastic tube connecting his windpipe with the respirator will start to cause him damage if left in for too long.
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Original:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news si 
Revised:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site 
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Original:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN  A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider  Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch  MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site  Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST  Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
Revised:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN . A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
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Original:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN  A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider  Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch  MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site  Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST  Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
Revised:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider . Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
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Original:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN  A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider  Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch  MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site  Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST  Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
Revised:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch . MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
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Original:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN  A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider  Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch  MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site  Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST  Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
Revised:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site . Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
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Original:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN  A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider  Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch  MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site  Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST  Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
Revised:  Live Keynote Coverage MacNN A correspondent in the keynote audience AppleInsider Macworld San Francisco 2005 Keynote Macintouch MacOSX.nl Netherlands Apple news site Summaries posted after the keynote ended: Mini Mac demand downs Apple's store briefly ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:34AM PST . Apple debuts new, low-priced iPod ZDNet, January 11, 2005 at 11:39AM P
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Original: Today, a controversial decision was taken by referee Chris Foy in a recent match between Sunderland and Chelsea to send off Chelsea's robben after "excessive celebrations".
Revised: Today, a controversial decision was taken by referee Chris Foy in a recent match between Sunderland A.F.C. and Chelsea F.C. to send off Chelsea's robben after "excessive celebrations".
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Original: Today, a controversial decision was taken by referee Chris Foy in a recent match between Sunderland A.F.C. and Chelsea F.C . to send off Chelsea's robben after "excessive celebrations".
Revised: Today, a controversial decision was taken by referee Chris Foy in a recent match between Sunderland A.F.C. and Chelsea F.C . to send off Chelsea's Robben after "excessive celebrations".
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Original:  referring to the fact that perimiter fences were only common in spanish football.
Revised:  referring to the fact that perimiter fences were only common in Spanish football.
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Original: In response to the decision, Andy gray noted;
Revised: In response to the decision, Andy Gray noted;
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Original:  They both got pretty exactly 50\% from the votes made on the election day (the 29th ).
Revised:  Both candidates got close to 50\% from the votes made on the election day (the 29th ).
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Original:  They both got pretty exactly 50\% from the votes made on the election day (the 29th ).
Revised:  They both got pretty exactly 50\% of election-day votes (January 29 ).
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Original:  Halonen failed to win an outright majority in the first round, resulting in a second round agiainst Niinistö, the runner-up in the first round.
Revised:  Halonen failed to win an outright majority in the first round, resulting in a second round against Niinistö, the runner-up in the first round.
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Original:  Halonen got 53,9\% of the advance voting's votes, while Niinistö got 46,1\%.
Revised:  Halonen got 53,9\% of the advance votes, while Niinistö got 46,1\%.
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Original: Finnish presidential election was held.
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Original:  No candidate reached more than 50\% of support, so the next round will be hold between  Tarja Halonen and Sauli Niinistö 29th. this mont  
Revised:  No candidate reached more than 50\% of support, so the next round will be hold between Tarja Halonen and Sauli Niinistö 29th. this month. 
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Original:  No candidate reached more than 50\% of support , so the next round will be hold between present  president Tarja Halonen and Sauli Niinistö 29th. this month.
Revised:  No candidate reached more than 50\% of votes , so the next round will be hold between present president Tarja Halonen and Sauli Niinistö 29th. this month.
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Original:  No candidate reached more than 50\% of support , so the next round will be hold between present  president Tarja Halonen and Sauli Niinistö 29th. this month.
Revised:  No candidate reached more than 50\% of support , so the next round will be hold between present the president Tarja Halonen and Sauli Niinistö 29th. this month.
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Original: Finland is a Nordic country with parlamentarism , in which both president and prime minister are heads of state.
Revised: Finland is a Nordic country with parliamentarism , in which both president and prime minister are heads of state.
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Original: Finland is a Nordic country with parlamentarism , in which both president and prime minister are heads of state.
Revised: Finland is a Nordic country with parlamentarism , in which both w:president and prime minister are heads of state.
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Original: Finland is a Nordic country with parliamentarism , in which both [[w:president] and prime minister are heads of state.
Revised: Finland is a Nordic country with parliamentarianism , in which both [[w:president] and prime minister are heads of state.
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Original:  No candidate reached more than 50\% of votes , so the next round will be hold between present the president Tarja Halonen and Sauli Niinistö  29th. this month.
Revised:  No candidate reached more than 50\% of votes , so the next round will be hold between present the president Tarja Halonen and Sauli Niinistö 29th. 
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Original:  In Finland there is a presidential election every 6 years . Finland is a Nordic country with parlamentarism , in which both president and prime minister are heads of state .
Revised:  Finland has its presidential election every 6 years . Finland is a Nordic country with parlamentarism , in which both president and prime minister are heads of state .
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Original:  In Finland there is a presidential election every 6 years . Finland is a Nordic country with parlamentarism , in which both president and prime minister are heads of state .
Revised:  In Finland there is a presidential election every 6 years . Finland is a Nordic country with semi-presidential system of government , in which both president and prime minister are heads of state .
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Original:  In Finland there is a presidential election every 6 years . Finland is a Nordic country with parlamentarism , in which both president and prime minister are heads of state .
Revised:  In Finland there is a presidential election every 6 years . Finland is a Nordic country with parlamentarism , in which both president and prime minister are heads of government .
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Original:  One of the main issues in this election is Finlands relation to NATO.
Revised:  One of the main issues in this election is Finland's relation to NATO.
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Original:  With  100\%  of the votes counted, no candidate reached more than the number of votes necessary to win.
Revised:  With all ( 100\% of the votes counted, no candidate reached more than the number of votes necessary to win.
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Original:  With  100\%  of the votes counted, no candidate reached more than the number of votes necessary to win.
Revised:  With 100\% ) of the votes counted, no candidate reached more than the number of votes necessary to win.
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