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Original:  police were set to demonstrate the firing of tear gas to the committee on Sunday afternoon, this being an attempt to counter allegations levelled at police by the PAD that other explosive devices were employed  
Revised:  police were set to demonstrate the firing of tear gas to the committee on Sunday afternoon, this being an attempt to counter allegations levelled at police by the PAD that other explosive devices were employed . 
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Original:  Entrances to the building had been sealed amid reports that pro-governments protesters were due to arrive in Bangkok
Revised:  Entrances to the building had been sealed amid reports that pro-government protesters were due to arrive in Bangkok
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Original:  Entrances to the building had been sealed amid reports that pro-government protesters were due to arrive in Bangkok  
Revised:  Entrances to the building had been sealed amid reports that pro-government protesters were due to arrive in Bangkok . 
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Original:  Under US law, he could have faced up to ten years inprisonment and/or fines of $500,000, due to US sanctions on Sudan   
Revised:  Under US law, he could have faced up to ten years inprisonment and/or fines of $500,000, due to US sanctions on Sudan . 
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Original: The twenty five year deal secured by Clivenden Sudan will see them pay the Sudanese government $8m in the event oil is produced.
Revised: The twenty five year deal secured by Clivenden Sudan will see it pay the Sudanese government $8m in the event oil is produced.
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Original:  The Wildcats annouced the death of the 31 year old earlier today.
Revised:  The Wildcats annouced the death of the 32-year-old earlier today.
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Original:  A spokesman said “ The Wakefield Trinity Wildcats are sad to announce the sudden passing of Adam Watene.
Revised:  A spokesman said , " The Wakefield Trinity Wildcats are sad to announce the sudden passing of Adam Watene.
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Original:  Everyone at the Wildcats ’ thoughts are with Adam’s family, and we ask for their privacy to be respected at this difficult time. ”
Revised:  Everyone at the Wildcats ' thoughts are with Adam’s family, and we ask for their privacy to be respected at this difficult time. ”
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Original:  Everyone at the Wildcats ’ thoughts are with Adam’s family, and we ask for their privacy to be respected at this difficult time. ”
Revised:  Everyone at the Wildcats ’ thoughts are with Adam’s family, and we ask for their privacy to be respected at this difficult time. "
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Original:  The Wildcats annouced the death of the 32-year-old earlier today.
Revised:  The Wildcats annouced the death of the 31-year-old earlier today.
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Original:  After a year of playing for the bulls of which he only made five first team apperences , he was allowed to sign for the Wakefield Trinity Wildcats.
Revised:  After a year of playing for the bulls of which he only made five first team appearences , he was allowed to sign for the Wakefield Trinity Wildcats.
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Original:  They reported he collasped in the gym shortly after a training session.
Revised:  They reported he collapsed in the gym shortly after a training session.
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Original:  HBOStoday dropped in value by 31.48\%   . Market dat
Revised:  HBOStoday dropped in value by 31.48\% . . Market dat
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Original: Markets worldwide have surged is value following efforts by governments to ease the effect of the ongoing financial crisis, which has recently caused massive falls in the stock market .
Revised: Markets worldwide have surged in value following efforts by governments to ease the effect of the ongoing financial crisis, which has recently caused massive falls in the stock market .
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Original: Markets worldwide have surged is value following efforts by governments to ease the effect of the ongoing financial crisis, which has recently caused massive falls in the stock market .
Revised: Markets worldwide have surged is value following efforts by governments to ease the effect of the ongoing financial crisis, which has recently caused a massive decline in the value of stock markets .
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Original:  The Dow Jones Industrial Average index is one of the indexes that have done particularly well today, and, as of 15:45 UTC, it has gone up in value by 5.45 \%, or 460.53 , although the index is still below 9000, at 8911.72 . General Motors was the best performer in this index, with its rise in value of 31.49\%.
Revised:  The Dow Jones Industrial Average index is one of the indexes that have done particularly well today, and, as of 15:45 UTC, it has gone up in value by 5.45 \%, or 460.53 , although the index is still below 9000, at 8911.72 . General Motors was the best performer in this index, with its value rising by 31.49\%.
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Original:  The Brazilian Bovespa index today went up by 9.07 \%, while the Hang Seng and Singapore Straits Times went up by 10.24  and 6.57\% respectively.
Revised:  The Brazilian Bovespa index today went up by 9.07 \%, while the Hang Seng and Singapore Straits Times went up by 10.24 \% and 6.57\% respectively.
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Original:  The Brazilian Bovespa index today went up by 8.85\%, while the Hang Seng and Singapore Straits Times went up by 10.24\% and 6.57\% respectively   .
Revised:  The Brazilian Bovespa index today went up by 8.85\%, while the Hang Seng and Singapore Straits Times went up by 10.24\% and 6.57\% respectively . .
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Original: The Dow Jones Industrial Average index is one of the indexes that have done particularly well today, and, as of 16:00 UTC, it has gone up in value by 6.30\%, or 532.13, although the index is still below 9000, at 8,983.32.
Revised: The Dow Jones Industrial Average index is one of the indexes that have done particularly well today, and, as of 16:00 UTC, it has gone up in value by 6.30\%, or 532.13, although the index is still over 9000, at 8,983.32.
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Original:  The Nasdaq rised by 11.81\%.
Revised:  The Nasdaq rose by 11.81\%.
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Original: Jolie Houston, an attorney in San Jose,  believes "Lenders will respond when it costs them less to maintain the property than to ignore local agency requirements."
Revised: Jolie Houston, an attorney in San Jose, California, believes "Lenders will respond when it costs them less to maintain the property than to ignore local agency requirements."
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Original:  Stockton, California, Coral Springs, Florida, Santee, California , Riverside County, California, and Murietta , California have all modeled recently enacted anti-blight measures after Chula Vista's.
Revised:  Coral Springs, Florida, Santee, California , Riverside County, California, and Murietta , California have all modeled recently enacted anti-blight measures after Chula Vista's.
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Original:  Stockton, California, Coral Springs, Florida, Santee, California , Riverside County, California, and Murietta , California have all modeled recently enacted anti-blight measures after Chula Vista's.
Revised:  Stockton, California, Coral Springs, Florida, Santee, California , Riverside County, and Murietta have all modeled recently enacted anti-blight measures after Chula Vista's.
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Original:  On Wednesday, 8 October, the Escondido , California City Council also voted to tighten local measures making lenders more accountable for maintenance of empty homes.
Revised:  On Wednesday, 8 October, the Escondido City Council also voted to tighten local measures making lenders more accountable for maintenance of empty homes.
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Original:  Chula Vista also requires prompt registration of vacant homes and applies stiff fines as high as  $1000 per day for failure to maintain a property.
Revised:  Chula Vista also requires prompt registration of vacant homes and applies stiff fines as high as US $1000 per day for failure to maintain a property.
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Original:  Jolie Houston, an attorney in San Jose , California , believes "Lenders will respond when it costs them less to maintain the property than to ignore local agency requirements."
Revised:  Jolie Houston, an attorney in San Jose , believes "Lenders will respond when it costs them less to maintain the property than to ignore local agency requirements."
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Original: Monday was to have seen the PAD protest and march on Bangkok police HQ, this was cancelled to allow people to attend the cremation and funeral services for the two dead.
Revised: Monday 's planned PAD protest and march on Bangkok police HQ, this was cancelled to allow people to attend the cremation and funeral services for the two dead.
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Original: Monday's planned PAD protest and march on Bangkok police HQ , this was cancelled to allow people to attend the cremation and funeral services for the two dead.
Revised: Monday's planned PAD protest and march on Bangkok police HQ was cancelled to allow people to attend the cremation and funeral services for the two dead.
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Original: Antipiratbyrån is an organization representing the movie and software industry in Sweden, working to protect the intellectual property of its beneficiors .
Revised: Antipiratbyrån is an organization representing the movie and software industry in Sweden, working to protect the intellectual property of its beneficiaries .
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Original:  This spring they started collecting IP-addresses of suspected copyright infringers .
Revised:  This spring they started collecting IP-addresses of suspected .
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Original:  They used the collected information to press charges and to contact the suspect's Internet service providers , demanding repercussions.
Revised:  They used the collected information to press charges and to contact the suspect's , demanding repercussions.
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Original:  Both the Swedish organization Piratbyrån - celebrating the verdict as a great victory - and the CEO of Jens of Sweden - a Swedish manufacturer of MP3-players - have stated that they might file a class action suit against the Anti-Piracy Bureau, together with the individuals registered
Revised:  Both the Swedish organization - celebrating the verdict as a great victory - and the CEO of Jens of Sweden - a Swedish manufacturer of MP3-players - have stated that they might file a class action suit against the Anti-Piracy Bureau, together with the individuals registered
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Original:  The new version comes with a number of performance enhancements and new features.
Revised:  It has been reported that the new version comes with a number of performance enhancements and new features.
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Original:  News sources report that the official download servers of OpenOffice.org crashed soon after the release due to heavy downloads.
Revised:  News sources report the official download servers of OpenOffice.org crashed soon after the release due to heavy downloads.
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Original:  OpenOffice.org 3.0 can  display multiple pages during editing and workbooks up to 1024 columns in each spreadsheet.
Revised:  OpenOffice.org 3.0 can now display multiple pages during editing and workbooks up to 1024 columns in each spreadsheet.
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Original: Users have reported that OpenOffice.org 3.0 has introduced a new graphical and text-based hybrid equation editor, a mail merge wizard, improved label templates and better interface for outlining.
Revised: Users report OpenOffice.org 3.0 has introduced a new graphical and text-based hybrid equation editor, a mail merge wizard, improved label templates and better interface for outlining.
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Original:  Openoffice.org 3.0 now claims to works out of the box in Mac OS X as a native Aqua application.
Revised:  Openoffice.org 3.0 now claims to work out of the box in Mac OS X as a native Aqua application.
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Original:  Free and open source (FOSS) office suite Openoffice.org version 3.0 was released on Monday.
Revised:  Free and open source (FOSS) office suite Openoffice.org on Monday.
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Original:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution obliges to the temporary president only to call assemblies for president and vice president  
Revised:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution obliges to the temporary president only to call assemblies for president and vice president . 
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Original: Earlier on Thursday, the Legislature had suspended the session that had predicted, in the House of the Liberty of Sucre, to decide the name of the new mandate of the Bolivians, due to the intense protests that were intensified after it was known the death of a miner on the part of the Army.
Revised: Earlier on Thursday, the Legislature had suspended the session that had predicted, in the House of the Liberty of Sucre, to decide the name of the new president of the Bolivians, due to the intense protests that were intensified after it was known the death of a miner on the part of the Army.
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Original:  The demonstrations also brought along a strong resistance of various social sectors about possible appointment of Hormando Cow Ten , president of the Senate, or of Mario Cossío, president of the House of Representatives, who constitutionally would have to have happened al departing president Carlos Mesa, that resigned the night on Monday .
Revised:  The demonstrations also brought along a strong resistance of various social sectors about possible appointment of Hormando Cow Ten , president of the Senate, or Mario Cossío, president of the House of Representatives, who constitutionally would have to have happened al departing president Carlos Mesa, that resigned the night on Monday .
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Original:  The demonstrations also brought along a strong resistance of various social sectors about possible appointment of Hormando Cow Ten , president of the Senate, or of Mario Cossío, president of the House of Representatives, who constitutionally would have to have happened al departing president Carlos Mesa, that resigned the night on Monday .
Revised:  The demonstrations also brought along a strong resistance of various social sectors about possible appointment of Hormando Cow Ten , president of the Senate, or of Mario Cossío, president of the House of Representatives, who constitutionally would have to succeed departing president Carlos Mesa, that resigned the night on Monday .
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Original:  The demonstrations also brought along a strong resistance of various social sectors about possible appointment of Hormando Cow Ten , president of the Senate, or of Mario Cossío, president of the House of Representatives, who constitutionally would have to have happened al departing president Carlos Mesa, that resigned the night on Monday .
Revised:  The demonstrations also brought along a strong resistance of various social sectors about possible appointment of Hormando Cow Ten , president of the Senate, or of Mario Cossío, president of the House of Representatives, who constitutionally would have to have happened al departing president Carlos Mesa, who resigned on Monday night .
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Original:  Nevertheless, at 22:45 local time (02:45 UTC on Friday), Congress resumed the session, accepted for unanimity the renunciation of Mesa and named Rodriguez Veltzé, a 49-year-old lawyer of Cochabamba, as the new temporary president of the country, after Cow Ten and Cossio renounced its right of succession.
Revised:  Nevertheless, at 22:45 local time (02:45 UTC on Friday), Congress resumed the session, accepted for unanimity the renunciation of Mesa and named Rodriguez Veltzé, a 49-year-old lawyer from Cochabamba, as the new temporary president of the country, after Cow Ten and Cossio renounced its right of succession.
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Original:  In his acceptance speech, Rodriguez Veltzé appeared to be convinced that his mandate "has to do with a renewal of the system" and promised to call the anticipated elections in a maximum of 150 days, just  the Bolivian Constitution says.
Revised:  In his acceptance speech, Rodriguez Veltzé said he's convinced that his mandate "has to do with a renewal of the system" and promised to call the anticipated elections in a maximum of 150 days, just the Bolivian Constitution says.
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Original:  In his acceptance speech, Rodriguez Veltzé appeared to be convinced that his mandate "has to do with a renewal of the system" and promised to call the anticipated elections in a maximum of 150 days, just  the Bolivian Constitution says.
Revised:  In his acceptance speech, Rodriguez Veltzé appeared to be convinced that his mandate "has to do with a renewal of the system" and promised to call the anticipated elections in a maximum of 150 days, just as the Bolivian Constitution says.
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Original:  Besides, he asked his countrymen  " it gives him a necessary and prudent time to elect a new constitutional president" and  " that they stop all the pressures and all the mobilizations".
Revised:  Besides, he asked his countrymen to " it gives him a necessary and prudent time to elect a new constitutional president" and " that they stop all the pressures and all the mobilizations".
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Original:  Besides, he asked his countrymen  " it gives him a necessary and prudent time to elect a new constitutional president" and  " that they stop all the pressures and all the mobilizations".
Revised:  Besides, he asked his countrymen " give him a necessary and prudent time to elect a new constitutional president" and " that they stop all the pressures and all the mobilizations".
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Original:  Besides, he asked his countrymen  " it gives him a necessary and prudent time to elect a new constitutional president" and  " that they stop all the pressures and all the mobilizations".
Revised:  Besides, he asked his countrymen " it gives him a necessary and prudent time to elect a new constitutional president" and to " that they stop all the pressures and all the mobilizations".
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Original:  Besides, he asked his countrymen  " it gives him a necessary and prudent time to elect a new constitutional president" and  " that they stop all the pressures and all the mobilizations".
Revised:  Besides, he asked his countrymen " it gives him a necessary and prudent time to elect a new constitutional president" and " stop all the pressures and all the mobilizations".
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Original:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and of Cow Ten , had announced  to be according to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although desires the assembly of a constituent assembly, possibly desist of her if the temporary president complies his promise to call to elections anticipated , probably for the next month of December.
Revised:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and of Cow Ten , had announced to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although desires the assembly of a constituent assembly, possibly desist of her if the temporary president complies his promise to call to elections anticipated , probably for the next month of December.
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Original:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and of Cow Ten , had announced  to be according to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although desires the assembly of a constituent assembly, possibly desist of her if the temporary president complies his promise to call to elections anticipated , probably for the next month of December.
Revised:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and of Cow Ten , had announced to be according to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although he wants a constitutional assembly, probably he desists as the temporary president complies his promise to call to elections anticipated , probably for the next month of December.
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Original:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and of Cow Ten , had announced  to be according to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although desires the assembly of a constituent assembly, possibly desist of her if the temporary president complies his promise to call to elections anticipated , probably for the next month of December.
Revised:  The coca leader Evo Morales, main opponent of Mesa and of Cow Ten , had announced to be according to the appointment of Rodriguez Veltzé and, although desires the assembly of a constituent assembly, possibly desist of her if the temporary president complies his promise to call anticipated polls, maybe next December.
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Original: Eduardo Rodríguez  Some minutes before midnight local time on Thursday, Eduardo Rodriguez Veltzé, then President of the Supreme Court of Justice, took oath as the new president of Bolivia, a country that has found itself plunged in a serious crisis for several months.
Revised: Eduardo Rodríguez Veltzé Some minutes before midnight local time on Thursday, Eduardo Rodriguez Veltzé, then President of the Supreme Court of Justice, took oath as the new president of Bolivia, a country that has found itself plunged in a serious crisis for several months.
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Original:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution obliges to the temporary president only to call assemblies for president and vice president . es:Eduardo Rodríguez Veltzé es el nuevo presidente de Bolivia it:Nuovo presidente della Bolivia promette nuove elezioni presidenziali pt:Eduardo Rodríguez Veltzé é o novo Presidente da Bolív
Revised:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution obliges to the temporary president only to call assemblies for president and vice president es:Eduardo Rodríguez Veltzé es el nuevo presidente de Bolivia it:Nuovo presidente della Bolivia promette nuove elezioni presidenziali pt:Eduardo Rodríguez Veltzé é o novo Presidente da Bolív
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Original:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution obliges to the temporary president only to call assemblies for president and vice president . es:Eduardo Rodríguez Veltzé es el nuevo presidente de Bolivia it:Nuovo presidente della Bolivia promette nuove elezioni presidenziali pt:Eduardo Rodríguez Veltzé é o novo Presidente da Bolív
Revised:  By aside, the Congress would have that to call to parliamentary elections, since the Constitution obliges to the temporary president only to call assemblies for president and vice president . 
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Original: Earlier on Thursday, the Legislature had suspended the session that had predicted, in the House of the Liberty of Sucre, to decide the name of the new president of the Bolivians, due to the intense protests that were intensified after it was known the death of a miner on the part of the Army.
Revised: Earlier on Thursday, the Legislature had suspended the session that had predicted, in the House of the Liberty of Sucre, to decide the name of the new president of the Bolivians, due to the intensified protests after it become known that a minor was killed by the Army.
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Original:  The demonstrations also brought along a strong resistance of various social sectors about possible appointment of Hormando Vaca Diez, president of the Senate, or Mario Cossío, president of the House of Representatives, who constitutionally would have to succeed departing president Carlos Mesa, who resigned on Monday night.
Revised:  The demonstrations also brought along a strong resistance of various social sectors to possible appointment of Hormando Vaca Diez, president of the Senate, or Mario Cossío, president of the House of Representatives, who constitutionally would have to succeed departing president Carlos Mesa, who resigned on Monday night.
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