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Original:  Fidel Castro , who was the Cuban president who seized power in a 1959 revolution, stated in a quote in Cuba's state-run newspaper Granma that when the National Assembly of Cuba meets on February 24 he "will not aspire to or accept... the positions of President of Council of State and Commander in Chief."
Revised:  Fidel Castro , who was the Cuban president who seized power in a 1959 revolution, stated in a quote in Cuba's state-run newspaper that when the National Assembly of Cuba meets on February 24 he "will not aspire to or accept... the positions of President of Council of State and Commander in Chief."
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Original:  Fidel Castro , who was the Cuban president who seized power in a 1959 revolution, stated in a quote in Cuba's state-run newspaper Granma that when the National Assembly of Cuba meets on February 24 he "will not aspire to or accept... the positions of President of Council of State and Commander in Chief."
Revised:  Fidel Castro , who was the Cuban president who seized power in a 1959 revolution, stated in a quote in Cuba's state-run newspaper Granma that when the meets on February 24 he "will not aspire to or accept... the positions of President of Council of State and Commander in Chief."
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Original:  March March 2: Armenian President Kocharyan declares state of emergency Armenian president Robert Kocharyan declared a state of emergency in Armenia after policemen used tear gas and firearms to disperse protests over alleged fraud in last month's presidential election .
Revised:  March March 2: Armenian President Kocharyan declares state of emergency Armenian declared a state of emergency in Armenia after policemen used tear gas and firearms to disperse protests over alleged fraud in last month's presidential election .
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Original:  March March 2: Armenian President Kocharyan declares state of emergency Armenian president Robert Kocharyan declared a state of emergency in Armenia after policemen used tear gas and firearms to disperse protests over alleged fraud in last month's presidential election .
Revised:  March March 2: Armenian President Kocharyan declares state of emergency Armenian president Robert Kocharyan declared a state of emergency in Armenia after policemen used tear gas and firearms to disperse protests over alleged fraud in last month's .
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Original:  March 19: Pakistan's parliament elects first female speaker The National Assembly of Pakistan elected Fahmida Mirza of the Pakistan Peoples Party (PPP) as its first female speaker, weeks after the general elections which ousted President Pervez Musharraf's party and gave the PPP the most seats in Parliament.
Revised:  March 19: Pakistan's parliament elects first female speaker The of Pakistan elected Fahmida Mirza of the Pakistan Peoples Party (PPP) as its first female speaker, weeks after the general elections which ousted President Pervez Musharraf's party and gave the PPP the most seats in Parliament.
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Original:  March 19: Pakistan's parliament elects first female speaker The National Assembly of Pakistan elected Fahmida Mirza of the Pakistan Peoples Party (PPP) as its first female speaker, weeks after the general elections which ousted President Pervez Musharraf's party and gave the PPP the most seats in Parliament.
Revised:  March 19: Pakistan's parliament elects first female speaker The National Assembly of Pakistan elected of the (PPP) as its first female speaker, weeks after the general elections which ousted President Pervez Musharraf's party and gave the PPP the most seats in Parliament.
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Original:  The man, identified by police as Josef Fritzl , is alleged to have started sexually abusing his daughter, named as Elisabeth Fritzl, when she was eleven years old, and to have subsequently fathered seven children by her.
Revised:  The man, identified by police as , is alleged to have started sexually abusing his daughter, named as Elisabeth Fritzl, when she was eleven years old, and to have subsequently fathered seven children by her.
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Original:  The news has shocked Austria, recalling the case of Natascha Kampusch who was kidnapped aged 10, and escaped after being held in a "dungeon" for eight years in 2006.
Revised:  The news has shocked Austria, recalling the case of who was kidnapped aged 10, and escaped after being held in a "dungeon" for eight years in 2006.
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Original:  July 29: Alaska senator Ted Stevens indicted in corruption scandal Senator Ted Stevens of Alaska has been indicted by federal grand jury on seven criminal counts for making false statements in his Senate financial disclosure forms.
Revised:  July 29: Alaska senator Ted Stevens indicted in corruption scandal Senator of Alaska has been indicted by federal grand jury on seven criminal counts for making false statements in his Senate financial disclosure forms.
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Original:  The longest-serving Republican in the Senate, Stevens is the highest-profile politician ensnared in the corruption scandal surrounding VECO Corporation and its executives' attempts to influence politics.
Revised:  The longest-serving Republican in the Senate, Stevens is the highest-profile politician ensnared in the surrounding and its executives' attempts to influence politics.
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Original:  Brett Favre , the National Football League's all-time leader in passing yards, touchdowns, victories, and consecutive games started for a quarterback was traded to the New York Jets for a conditional draft pick in the 2009 NFL Draft .
Revised:  , the National Football League's all-time leader in passing yards, touchdowns, victories, and consecutive games started for a quarterback was traded to the New York Jets for a conditional draft pick in the 2009 NFL Draft .
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Original:  Brett Favre , the National Football League's all-time leader in passing yards, touchdowns, victories, and consecutive games started for a quarterback was traded to the New York Jets for a conditional draft pick in the 2009 NFL Draft .
Revised:  Brett Favre , the National Football League's all-time leader in passing yards, touchdowns, victories, and consecutive games started for a quarterback was traded to the for a conditional draft pick in the 2009 NFL Draft .
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Original:  Brett Favre , the National Football League's all-time leader in passing yards, touchdowns, victories, and consecutive games started for a quarterback was traded to the New York Jets for a conditional draft pick in the 2009 NFL Draft .
Revised:  Brett Favre , the National Football League's all-time leader in passing yards, touchdowns, victories, and consecutive games started for a quarterback was traded to the New York Jets for a conditional draft pick in the .
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Original:  Favre, 38, had previously announced his retirement from the NFL in March but was reinstated after he voiced his intentions to return to play for the 2008 NFL season .
Revised:  Favre, 38, had previously announced his retirement from the NFL in March but was reinstated after he voiced his intentions to return to play for the .
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Original:  Favre had previously played for the Green Bay Packers from 1992 to 2007.
Revised:  Favre had previously played for the from 1992 to 2007.
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Original:  August 8: Russia joins South Ossetian war The War in South Ossetia escalated as Russian forces were sent into the conflict on the Ossetian side.
Revised:  August 8: Russia joins South Ossetian war The escalated as Russian forces were sent into the conflict on the Ossetian side.
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Original:  August 8: 2008 Olympic Games officially open The 2008 Olympic Games commence in the Bird's Nest in Beijing, China with 90,000 in attendance.
Revised:  August 8: 2008 Olympic Games officially open The commence in the Bird's Nest in Beijing, China with 90,000 in attendance.
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Original:  August 8: 2008 Olympic Games officially open The 2008 Olympic Games commence in the Bird's Nest in Beijing, China with 90,000 in attendance.
Revised:  August 8: 2008 Olympic Games officially open The 2008 Olympic Games commence in the in Beijing, China with 90,000 in attendance.
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Original:  Phelps holding one of his Beijing medals August 17: Beijing 2008: Michael Phelps wins eighth gold American swimmer Michael Phelps , 23, has set a new record for the most gold medals won in one Olympic games by winning his eighth gold medal of the 2008 Olympic games, beating the previous world record of seven that was set by Mark Spitz in the 1972 Olympic Games , which took place in Munich , Germany.
Revised:  Phelps holding one of his Beijing medals August 17: Beijing 2008: Michael Phelps wins eighth gold American swimmer , 23, has set a new record for the most gold medals won in one Olympic games by winning his eighth gold medal of the 2008 Olympic games, beating the previous world record of seven that was set by Mark Spitz in the 1972 Olympic Games , which took place in Munich , Germany.
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Original:  Phelps holding one of his Beijing medals August 17: Beijing 2008: Michael Phelps wins eighth gold American swimmer Michael Phelps , 23, has set a new record for the most gold medals won in one Olympic games by winning his eighth gold medal of the 2008 Olympic games, beating the previous world record of seven that was set by Mark Spitz in the 1972 Olympic Games , which took place in Munich , Germany.
Revised:  Phelps holding one of his Beijing medals August 17: Beijing 2008: Michael Phelps wins eighth gold American swimmer Michael Phelps , 23, has set a new record for the most gold medals won in one Olympic games by winning his eighth gold medal of the 2008 Olympic games, beating the previous world record of seven that was set by in the , which took place in Munich , Germany.
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Original:  Phelps holding one of his Beijing medals August 17: Beijing 2008: Michael Phelps wins eighth gold American swimmer Michael Phelps , 23, has set a new record for the most gold medals won in one Olympic games by winning his eighth gold medal of the 2008 Olympic games, beating the previous world record of seven that was set by Mark Spitz in the 1972 Olympic Games , which took place in Munich , Germany.
Revised:  Phelps holding one of his Beijing medals August 17: Beijing 2008: Michael Phelps wins eighth gold American swimmer Michael Phelps , 23, has set a new record for the most gold medals won in one Olympic games by winning his eighth gold medal of the 2008 Olympic games, beating the previous world record of seven that was set by Mark Spitz in the 1972 Olympic Games , which took place in , Germany.
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Original:  August 30: Barack Obama accepts US presidential nomination from the Democratic Party United States presidential candidate Barack Obama accepted the United States Democratic Party's nomination for president Thursday evening at Invesco Field in Denver , Colorado before a crowd estimated to be between 75,000 to 80,000 people.
Revised:  August 30: Barack Obama accepts US presidential nomination from the Democratic Party United States presidential candidate Barack Obama accepted the United States Democratic Party's nomination for president Thursday evening at in , Colorado before a crowd estimated to be between 75,000 to 80,000 people.
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Original:  The questions arose amid controversy that Palin's 17-year-old unmarried daughter Bristol was five months pregnant at the time and how Palin was possibly abusing her powers as Governor of Alaska in the "Troopergate" scandal.
Revised:  The questions arose amid controversy that Palin's 17-year-old unmarried daughter Bristol was five months pregnant at the time and how Palin was possibly abusing her powers as Governor of Alaska in the scandal.
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Original:  October 10: Dow Jones recovers hundreds of points, before losing them in minutes Following a large fall at the start of the day, the Dow Jones Industrial Average has recovered by hundreds of points, with it climbing over 250 points again before dropping off to down 100 in just minutes.
Revised:  October 10: Dow Jones recovers hundreds of points, before losing them in minutes Following a large fall at the start of the day, the has recovered by hundreds of points, with it climbing over 250 points again before dropping off to down 100 in just minutes.
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Original:  November November 5: Barack Obama elected 44th President of the United States 190px|Election results The 2008 Democratic presidential nominee, Senator Barack Obama of Illinois, 47, is projected to win at least 349 electoral votes, more than enough to clinch the Presidency of the United States .
Revised:  November November 5: Barack Obama elected 44th President of the United States 190px|Election results The 2008 Democratic presidential nominee, Senator Barack Obama of Illinois, 47, is projected to win at least 349 electoral votes, more than enough to clinch the .
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Original:  Obama is the first African American to be elected President in U.S. history.
Revised:  Obama is the first to be elected President in U.S. history.
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Original:  November 14: Eurozone now officially in recession The Eurozone is now officially in a recession, due to the recently released figures showing that, in the third quarter of 2008, the economy shrunk by 0.2\%.
Revised:  November 14: Eurozone now officially in recession The is now officially in a recession, due to the recently released figures showing that, in the third quarter of 2008, the economy shrunk by 0.2\%.
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Original:  December 28: NFL: Packers defeat Lions 31–21, Lions become first team to finish season with 0-16 record The Green Bay Packers defeated the Detroit Lions 31–21 at Lambeau Field in Green Bay , Wisconsin.
Revised:  December 28: NFL: Packers defeat Lions 31–21, Lions become first team to finish season with 0-16 record The defeated the 31–21 at Lambeau Field in Green Bay , Wisconsin.
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Original:  December 28: NFL: Packers defeat Lions 31–21, Lions become first team to finish season with 0-16 record The Green Bay Packers defeated the Detroit Lions 31–21 at Lambeau Field in Green Bay , Wisconsin.
Revised:  December 28: NFL: Packers defeat Lions 31–21, Lions become first team to finish season with 0-16 record The Green Bay Packers defeated the Detroit Lions 31–21 at in , Wisconsin.
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Original:  The Lions made National Football League history not winning a single game in the 2008 NFL season .
Revised:  The Lions made National Football League history not winning a single game in the .
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Original:  The Lions joined the 1976 Tampa Bay Buccaneers as the modern NFL's only teams to finish a season without a victory or tie
Revised:  The Lions joined the as the modern NFL's only teams to finish a season without a victory or tie
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Original:  The Lions joined the 1976 Tampa Bay Buccaneers as the modern NFL's only teams to finish a season without a victory or tie
Revised:  The Lions joined the 1976 Tampa Bay Buccaneers as the modern NFL's only teams to finish a season without a victory or 
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Original: November November 5: Barack Obama elected 44th President of the United States 190px|Election results The 2008 Democratic presidential nominee, Senator Barack Obama of Illinois, 47, is projected to win at least 349 electoral votes, more than enough to clinch the  .
Revised: November November 5: Barack Obama elected 44th President of the United States 190px|Election results The 2008 Democratic presidential nominee, Senator Barack Obama of Illinois, 47, is projected to win at least 349 electoral votes, more than enough to clinch the Presidency of the United States .
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Original: Shivraj Patil was already facing stiff criticism from Indian media and India's main political opposition party Bhartiya Janata Party (BJP).
Revised: Shivraj Patil was already facing stiff criticism from Indian media and India's main political opposition party (BJP).
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Original: As of Tuesday, Chinese bloggers on Microsoft's MSN service will face the scrutiny of censors | . Company employees, under the direction of Chinese officials, will peruse blogs for 'banned' words, such as 'democracy', 'freedom', 'human rights', and 'Taiwan independence'.
Revised: As of Tuesday, Chinese bloggers on Microsoft's MSN service will face the scrutiny of censors . Company employees, under the direction of Chinese officials, will peruse blogs for 'banned' words, such as 'democracy', 'freedom', 'human rights', and 'Taiwan independence'.
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Original:  Company employees, under the direction of Chinese officials, will peruse blogs for 'banned' words , such as 'democracy', 'freedom', 'human rights', and ' Taiwan independence'.
Revised:  Company employees, under the direction of Chinese officials, will peruse blogs for 'banned' words , such as 'democracy', 'freedom', 'human rights', and ' taiwan independence'.
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Original:  This is an extension of an earlier action taken by the government of the People's Republic of China that already requires all Chinese internet users to register their web journals  .
Revised:  This is an extension of an earlier action taken by the government of the People's Republic of China that already requires all Chinese internet users to register their web journals with the government .
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Original:  Ever since the Communist Party of China (CPC) took control of the government in 1945, the press has been strictly regulated, but at the advent of the internet, there were worries on the part of the CPC on whether their influence on the Chinese media would hold.
Revised:  Ever since the Communist Party of China (CPC) took control of the government in 1945, the press has been strictly regulated, but with the advent of the internet, there were worries on the part of the CPC on whether their influence on the Chinese media would hold.
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Original:  So, Chinese officials called on their fellow nations for a more regulated internet, it was dissmissed by many as impossible and contradictory of what the internet stands for.
Revised:  As Chinese officials called on their fellow nations for a more regulated internet, it was dissmissed by many as impossible and contradictory of what the internet stands for.
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Original:  So, Chinese officials called on their fellow nations for a more regulated internet, it was dissmissed by many as impossible and contradictory of what the internet stands for.
Revised:  So, Chinese officials called for a more regulated internet, it was dissmissed by many as impossible and contradictory of what the internet stands for.
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Original:  So, Chinese officials called on their fellow nations for a more regulated internet, it was dissmissed by many as impossible and contradictory of what the internet stands for.
Revised:  So, Chinese officials called on their fellow nations for a more regulated internet, outsiders dissmissed such regulation as impossible and contradictory of what the internet stands for.
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Original:  Then, when it was evident no action would be taken by the international community, a crackdown started in 2003 , with the closure of many internet cafés , and the arrest of dozens of users.
Revised:  Then, when it was evident no action would be taken by the international community, a crackdown started in 2003 resulted in the closure of many internet cafés , and the arrest of dozens of users.
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Original:  Then, when it was evident no action would be taken by the international community, a crackdown started in 2003 , with the closure of many internet cafés , and the arrest of dozens of users.
Revised:  Then, when it was evident no action would be taken by the international community, a crackdown started in 2003 , with the closure of many internet cafés and the arrest of dozens of users.
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Original:  Also, Microsoft is not the only company obliging to the censorship policy of the People's Republic of China .
Revised:  Also, Microsoft is not the only company obliging to the censorship policy of the People's Republic of China —
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Original: Residents in Minyama, on Queensland's Sunshine Coast, have vowed to keep fighting the developement of a 24 hour McDonalds on Nicklin Way.
Revised: Residents in Minyama, on Queensland's Sunshine Coast, have vowed to keep fighting the developement of a 24 hour McDonald's on Nicklin Way.
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Original:  "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24 hour McDonalds in my division," says Councillor Thompson, “We have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.”
Revised:  "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24 hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Thompson, “We have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.”
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Original: Residents in Minyama, on Queensland's Sunshine Coast, have vowed to keep fighting the developement of a 24 hour McDonald's on Nicklin Way.
Revised: Residents in Minyama, on Queensland's Sunshine Coast, have vowed to keep fighting the development of a 24-hour McDonald's on Nicklin Way.
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Original:  "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24 hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Thompson , “ We have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.”
Revised:  "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24-hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Thompson , “ We have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.”
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Original:  "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24 hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Thompson , “ We have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.”
Revised:  "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24 hour McDonald's in my division," Councillor Thompson said , “ We have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.”
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Original:  "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24 hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Thompson , “ We have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.”
Revised:  "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24 hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Thompson , “ we have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.”
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Original:  The 24 hour McDonalds in Councillor Thompsons division, in Mooloolaba, is part of a larger complex and does not back onto residential premises.
Revised:  The 24-hour McDonald's in Councillor Thompsons division, in Mooloolaba, is part of a larger complex and does not back onto residential premises.
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Original: Residents in Minyama, on Queensland  's Sunshine Coast, have vowed to keep fighting the developement of a 24-hour McDonald's on Nicklin Way.
Revised: Residents in Minyama, on Queensland , Australia 's Sunshine Coast, have vowed to keep fighting the developement of a 24-hour McDonald's on Nicklin Way.
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Original: Residents in Minyama, on Queensland  's Sunshine Coast, have vowed to keep fighting the developement of a 24-hour McDonald's on Nicklin Way.
Revised: Residents in Minyama, on Queensland 's Sunshine Coast, have vowed to keep fighting the development of a 24-hour McDonald's on Nicklin Way.
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Original:  Coucillor Chris Thompson, who represents Division 4 in the Sunshine Coast Regional Council, has said that he will recomend that it be rejected at the general comitee meeting.
Revised:  Councillor Chris Thompson, who represents Division 4 in the Sunshine Coast Regional Council, has said that he will recomend that it be rejected at the general comitee meeting.
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