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Original:  Bush also urged what he felt was the need for American troops to continue their presence in Iraq, to ensure what he described as the successful transition of the Iraqi government.
Revised:  Bush also urged what he felt was the need for American troops to continue in Iraq, to ensure what he described as the successful transition of the Iraqi government.
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Original:  In reference to the victory of Hamas in the recent Palestinian elections , Bush urged its leaders to disarm and recognize Israel as a sovereign state.
Revised:  In reference to the victory of in the , Bush urged its leaders to disarm and recognize Israel as a sovereign state.
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Original:  Talking about foreign policy, Bush said Iran is held hostage by a clerical elite and that it is not a democracy .
Revised:  Talking about foreign policy, Bush said Iran is held hostage by a clerical elite and that .
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Original:  He also alleged that Iran has nuclear ambitions , and said the world "must not permit the Iranian regime to gain nuclear weapons."
Revised:  He also alleged that , and said the world "must not permit the Iranian regime to gain nuclear weapons."
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Original:  Sheehan had been invited to the speech by Rep. Lynn Woolsey (D-CA).
Revised:  Sheehan had been invited to the speech by .
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Original:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests ;
Revised:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests 
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Original:  along with not being legal to do so .
Revised:  along with not being legal to cooperate with the government wiretap program .
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Original:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests along with not being legal to cooperate with the government  wiretap program.
Revised:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests along with not being legal to cooperate with the government 's wiretap program.
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Original:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests  along with not being legal  to cooperate with the government 's wiretap program.
Revised:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests , along with not being legal to cooperate with the government 's wiretap program.
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Original:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests  along with not being legal  to cooperate with the government 's wiretap program.
Revised:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests along with not being legal , to cooperate with the government 's wiretap program.
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Original:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests  along with not being legal  to cooperate with the government 's wiretap program.
Revised:  He goes on to say their goal is to tell AT&T that it is not in their fiscal best interests along with not being legal to cooperate with the President 's wiretap program.
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Original: The Bush Administration and NSA has come under fire over the issue.
Revised: The Bush Administration and NSA have come under fire over the issue.
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Original:  The suit  alleges that AT&T violated federal laws by collaborating with government to eavesdrop on US citizens.
Revised:  The suit alleges that AT&T violated federal laws by collaborating with government to eavesdrop on U.S. citizens.
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Original:  EFF goes on to claim that AT&T turned over 2 databases consisting of their subscribers' communication and internet usage records.
Revised:  The EFF claims that AT&T turned over 2 databases consisting of their subscribers' communication and internet usage records.
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Original:  The class action suit   is seeking damages of $22,000 for each AT&T customer in addition to punitive fines  &
Revised:  According to the class action suit is seeking damages of $22,000 for each AT&T customer in addition to punitive fines &
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Original:  The class action suit   is seeking damages of $22,000 for each AT&T customer in addition to punitive fines  &
Revised:  The class action suit is seeking damages of $22,000 for each AT&T customer in addition to punitive fines . &
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Original:  The class action suit   is seeking damages of $22,000 for each AT&T customer in addition to punitive fines  &
Revised:  The class action suit is seeking damages of $22,000 for each AT&T customer in addition to punitive fines AT&
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Original: comScore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
Revised: ComScore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
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Original: ComScore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
Revised: comScore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
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Original:  URL comScore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
Revised:  URL Comscore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
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Original: Online Retailers in Canada experience strong growth URL Comscore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
Revised:  URL Comscore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
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Original: Online Retailers in Canada experience strong growth URL Comscore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
Revised: Online Retailers in Canada experience strong growth URL comScore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
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Original: Online Retailers in Canada experience strong growth URL Comscore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
Revised:  Comscore Media Metrix Canada has reported that Online Retailers in Canada have seen significant increase in traffic to their websites.
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Original:  Flowers and home furnishings purchases showed big increases from a year ag
Revised:  Flowers and home furnishings purchases showed big increases from a year ago
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Original:  For December 2005, 17.9 million shopped retail web sites .
Revised:  In December 2005, 17.9 million shopped retail web sites .
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Original:  At the top of the list is eBay with 10.9 million visitors ;
Revised:  At the top of the list is eBay with 10.9 million visitors ,
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Original:  Amazon was next with 6.5 million ;
Revised:  Amazon was next with 6.5 million , an
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Original:  Flowers and home furnishings purchases  showed big increases from a year ago
Revised:  Flowers and home furnishings purchases also showed big increases from a year ago
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Original:  The most recent example is President Bush using the phrase "terrorist surveillance program" to describe the National Security Agency's illegal practice of domestic wiretapping without proper warrants.
Revised:  The most recent example is President Bush using the phrase "terrorist surveillance program" to describe the National Security Agency's practice of domestic wiretapping without proper warrants.
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Original: According to the Associated Press, Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld explained to Penagon reporters today why the term, "the long war" should be used instead of the "war on terror."
Revised: According to the Associated Press, Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld explained to Pentagon reporters today why the term, "the long war" should be used instead of the "war on terror."
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Original:  It's a fight against al Qaeda and it's associated movements...
Revised:  It's a fight against al Qaeda and its associated movements...
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Original:  Reef in real strife, climate experts warn * * Email * Print * Normal font * Large font%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Melissa Fyfe February 1, 2006 AdvertisementAdvertisement THE Great Barrier Reef's future looks more grim after a report by climate scientists that predicts the world will struggle to curb "dangerous" climate change.
Revised:  * * Email * Print * Normal font * Large font%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Melissa Fyfe February 1, 2006 AdvertisementAdvertisement THE Great Barrier Reef's future looks more grim after a report by climate scientists that predicts the world will struggle to curb "dangerous" climate change.
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Original:  Reef in real strife, climate experts warn * * Email * Print * Normal font * Large font%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Melissa Fyfe February 1, 2006 AdvertisementAdvertisement THE Great Barrier Reef's future looks more grim after a report by climate scientists that predicts the world will struggle to curb "dangerous" climate change.
Revised:  Reef in real strife, climate experts warn %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Melissa Fyfe February 1, 2006 AdvertisementAdvertisement THE Great Barrier Reef's future looks more grim after a report by climate scientists that predicts the world will struggle to curb "dangerous" climate change.
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Original:  Reef in real strife, climate experts warn * * Email * Print * Normal font * Large font%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Melissa Fyfe February 1, 2006 AdvertisementAdvertisement THE Great Barrier Reef's future looks more grim after a report by climate scientists that predicts the world will struggle to curb "dangerous" climate change.
Revised:  Reef in real strife, climate experts warn * * Email * Print * Normal font * Large font%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% THE Great Barrier Reef's future looks more grim after a report by climate scientists that predicts the world will struggle to curb "dangerous" climate change.
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Original:  Reef in real strife, climate experts warn * * Email * Print * Normal font * Large font%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Melissa Fyfe February 1, 2006 AdvertisementAdvertisement THE Great Barrier Reef's future looks more grim after a report by climate scientists that predicts the world will struggle to curb "dangerous" climate change.
Revised:  Reef in real strife, climate experts warn * * Email * Print * Normal font * Large font%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By Melissa Fyfe February 1, 2006 AdvertisementAdvertisement 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The United Kingdom Meteorological Office report, Avoiding Dangerous Climate Change, came as scientists warned yesterday that they were concerned at the severe bleaching now hitting coral reefs around the Keppel islands.
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Original:  British Prime Minister Tony Blair wrote the foreword to the office's report, warning that the risks of climate change — when heat-trapping gases from fossil fuels warm the earth — may well be "greater than we thought".
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The report suggests that a two-degree warming would also see 97 per cent of the world's coral reefs lost, lower crop yields, put 2.8 billion people at risk of water shortage and the total loss of summer Arctic sea ice, sparking the extinction of the polar bear and walrus.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% According to the report's modelling, by the Netherlands Environmental Assessment Agency and the US National Centre for Atmospheric Research, stabilising at 450 ppm would require global emissions to peak around 2015 and then reduce by up to 40 per cent compared to 1990 levels by 2050.
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Original:  Meanwhile, the researchers noted, the International Energy Agency and others forecast that global energy demand would increase by 60 per cent by the year 2030.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Queensland University's Professor Ove Hoegh-Guldberg, a renowned coral expert, said yesterday he was amazed at the damage to corals on the Keppel islands.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Professor Hoegh-Guldberg, a renowned coral expert, said yesterday he was amazed at the damage to corals on the Keppel islands.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Queensland University's Professor Ove Hoegh-Guldberg, a renowned coral expert, said yesterday he was amazed at the damage to corals on the Keppel islands.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Queensland University's Professor Ove Hoegh-Guldberg, a renowned coral expert, said he was amazed at the damage to corals on the Keppel islands.
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Original: University of Queensland scientists say they were shocked by the reef's condition and are concerned the entire reef may be at risk of destruction from global warming.
Revised: University of Quuensland scientists say they were shocked by the reef's condition and are concerned the entire reef may be at risk of destruction from global warming.
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Original:  "Going down to 10 metres , every piece of coral was a glowing white colour - all that brown colour had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
Revised:  "Going down to 10 meters , every piece of coral was a glowing white colour - all that brown colour had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
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Original:  "Going down to 10 metres , every piece of coral was a glowing white colour - all that brown colour had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
Revised:  "Going down to 10 metres , every piece of coral was a glowing white color - all that brown colour had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
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Original:  "Going down to 10 metres , every piece of coral was a glowing white colour - all that brown colour had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
Revised:  "Going down to 10 metres , every piece of coral was a glowing white colour - all that brown color had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
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Original:  Australian Conservation Foundation 's Don Henry is worried.
Revised:  Australian Conservation Fooundation 's Don Henry is worried.
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Original:  The United Kingdom Meteorological Office report, Avoiding Dangerous Climate Change, suggests that a two-degree warming would also see 97 per cent of the world's coral reefs lost, lower crop yields, put 2.8 billion people at risk of water shortage and the total loss of summer Arctic sea ice, sparking the extinction of the polar bear and walrus
Revised:  The United Kingdom Meteorological Office report, Avoiding Dangerous Climate Change, suggests that a two-degree warming would also see 97 per cent of the world's coral reefs lost, lower crop yields, put 2.8 billion people at risk of water shortage and the total loss of summer Arctic Sea ice, sparking the extinction of the polar bear and walrus
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Original:  "Going down to 10 meters, every piece of coral was a glowing white color - all that brown color had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
Revised:  "Going down to 10 meters, every piece of coral was a glowing white colour - all that brown color had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
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Original:  "Going down to 10 meters, every piece of coral was a glowing white color - all that brown color had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
Revised:  "Going down to 10 meters, every piece of coral was a glowing white color - all that brown colour had disappeared and that was surprising for us," he said.
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Original:  The United Kingdom Meteorological Office report, Avoiding Dangerous Climate Change, suggests that a two-degree warming would also see 97 per cent of the world's coral reefs lost, lower crop yields, put 2.8 billion people at risk of water shortage and the total loss of summer Arctic Sea ice, sparking the extinction of the polar bear and walrus
Revised:  The United Kingdom Meteorological Office report, Avoiding Dangerous Climate Change, suggests that a two-degree warming would also see 97 percent of the world's coral reefs lost, lower crop yields, put 2.8 billion people at risk of water shortage and the total loss of summer Arctic Sea ice, sparking the extinction of the polar bear and walrus
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Original:  The last severe cases of bleaching occurred in 1998 and 2002, the last leaving more than 5 per cent of the reef destroyed.
Revised:  The last severe cases of bleaching occurred in 1998 and 2002, the last leaving more than 5 percent of the reef destroyed.
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Original: The United States Federal Bureau of Investigation is currently investigating if a possible civil rights violation was commited by a sheriff's deputy of the San San Bernardino County after the shooting of an unarmed US Air Force military policeman by the deputy.
Revised: The United States Federal Bureau of Investigation is currently investigating if a possible civil rights violation was commited by a sheriff's deputy of the San Bernardino County after the shooting of an unarmed US Air Force military policeman by the deputy.
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Original:  Carrion was the passegner of Luis Fernando Escobedo, 21, when police began chasing the blue Corvette that Carrion was in  for speeding.
Revised:  Carrion was the passegner of Luis Fernando Escobedo, 21, when police began chasing the blue Corvette that Carrion was in , for speeding.
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Original:  The car reached over speeds of 100mph (160 km/h) during the short five minute chas    
Revised:  The car reached over speeds of 100mph (160 km/h) during the short five minute chase. 
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Original:  Carrion was on leave on after serving six months in Iraq.
Revised:  Carrion was on leave after serving six months in Iraq.
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Original:  The incident in which Carrion took place on Sunday, in Chino, California, after a short police chase.
Revised:  The incident took place on Sunday, in Chino, California, after a short police chase.
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Original:  Carrion was the passegner of Luis Fernando Escobedo, 21, when police began chasing the blue Chevrolet Corvette of Escobedo that Carrion was in, for speeding.
Revised:  Carrion was the passegner of Luis Fernando Escobedo, 21, when police began chasing Escobedo's blue Chevrolet Corvette of Escobedo that Carrion was in, for speeding.
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Original:  Carrion was the passegner of Luis Fernando Escobedo, 21, when police began chasing the blue Chevrolet Corvette of Escobedo that Carrion was in, for speeding.
Revised:  Carrion was the passegner of Luis Fernando Escobedo, 21, when police began chasing the blue Chevrolet Corvette for speeding.
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Original:  After the chase ended , a neighbor , Jose Luis Valdez , began taping the accident after the car crashed outside his house.
Revised:  After the chase ended in a crash , Jose Luis Valdez , began taping the accident after the car crashed outside his house.
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Original:  After the chase ended , a neighbor , Jose Luis Valdez , began taping the accident after the car crashed outside his house.
Revised:  After the chase ended , a neighbor , Jose Luis Valdez began taping the accident after the car crashed outside his house.
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Original:  After the chase ended , a neighbor , Jose Luis Valdez , began taping the accident after the car crashed outside his house.
Revised:  After the chase ended , a neighbor , Jose Luis Valdez , began taping the accident after the car crashed near his house.
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Original:  Cindy Beavers, a spokesperson for the San Bernardino County Sheriff's Department stated that the deputy has been put on paid leave.
Revised:  Cindy Beavers, a spokesperson for the San Bernardino County Sheriff's Department stated the deputy has been put on paid leave.
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Original: The military policeman  Senior Airman Elio Carrion, 21, was shot while on leave after serving six month tour in Iraq.
Revised: The military policeman , Senior Airman Elio Carrion, 21, was shot while on leave after serving six month tour in Iraq.
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Original: The military policeman  Senior Airman Elio Carrion, 21, was shot while on leave after serving six month tour in Iraq.
Revised: The military policeman Senior Airman Elio Carrion, 21, was shot while on leave after serving a six month deployment in Iraq.
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Original: The United States Federal Bureau of Investigation is currently investigating if a possible civil rights violation was commited by a sheriff's deputy of the San Bernardino County after the shooting of an unarmed US Air Force military policeman by the county deputy .
Revised: The United States Federal Bureau of Investigation is currently investigating if a possible civil rights violation was committed by a sheriff's deputy of the San Bernardino County after the shooting of an unarmed US Air Force military policeman by the county deputy .
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Original: The United States Federal Bureau of Investigation is currently investigating if a possible civil rights violation was commited by a sheriff's deputy of the San Bernardino County after the shooting of an unarmed US Air Force military policeman by the county deputy .
Revised: The United States Federal Bureau of Investigation is currently investigating if a possible civil rights violation was commited by a sheriff's deputy of the San Bernardino County after the shooting of an unarmed U.S. Air Force military policeman by the county deputy .
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Original: The United States Federal Bureau of Investigation is currently investigating if a possible civil rights violation was commited by a sheriff's deputy of the San Bernardino County after the shooting of an unarmed US Air Force military policeman by the county deputy .
Revised: The United States Federal Bureau of Investigation is currently investigating if a possible civil rights violation was commited by a sheriff's deputy of the San Bernardino County after the shooting of an unarmed US Air Force military policeman .
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Original:  After the chase ended in a crash  , Jose Luis Valdez began taping the accident when the car crashed near his house .
Revised:  After the chase ended in a crash near his house , Jose Luis Valdez began taping the accident when the car crashed near his house .
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Original:  After the chase ended in a crash  , Jose Luis Valdez began taping the accident when the car crashed near his house .
Revised:  After the chase ended in a crash , Jose Luis Valdez began taping the accident aftermath .
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Original:  The deputy then seems to say "Get up , " several times.
Revised:  The deputy then seems to say "Get up " several times.
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Original:  Carrion then says , "I'm going to get up."
Revised:  Carrion then said , "I'm going to get up."
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Original:  As Carrion begins to the rise the deputy fires three shots which hit Carrion in the chest, leg and rib . After Carrion is hit he says , "I mean you no harm."
Revised:  As Carrion begins to rise, the deputy fires three shots which hit Carrion in the chest, leg and rib . After Carrion is hit he says , "I mean you no harm."
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