wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  For as long as nuclear weapons exist, we will live under a nuclear shadow." U.S. Ambassador  John Roos also attended, marking the first time that a US representative has attended the ceremony.
Revised:  For as long as nuclear weapons exist, we will live under a nuclear shadow." U.S. Ambassador John Roos also attended, marking the first time that a U.S. representative has attended the ceremony.
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Original:  The underemployment  , which counts part-time laborers looking for a full-time job and those discouraged workers, was flat at 16.5\% from June.
Revised:  The underemployment rate , which counts part-time laborers looking for a full-time job and those discouraged workers, was flat at 16.5\% from June.
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Original:  The previous estimate also said that 83,000 private sector jobs were created, however , the new estimate says that just 31,000 private positions were filled.
Revised:  The previous estimate also said that 83,000 private sector jobs were created, however the new estimate says that just 31,000 private positions were filled.
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Original:  However , most economists were fairly confident that though there would be slower growth in the future, the country wouldn't slip into another recession.
Revised:  Despite this , most economists were fairly confident that though there would be slower growth in the future, the country wouldn't slip into another recession.
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Original:  Some American companies are shifting overseas manufacturing jobs back to the US  . GE has relocated production of their  water heaters to the US, and Ford Motor has brought 2,000 jobs to the US from suppliers, including those from overseas
Revised:  Some American companies are shifting overseas manufacturing jobs back to the US . GE has relocated production of their water heaters to the US, while Ford Motor has brought 2,000 jobs to the US from suppliers, including those from overseas
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Original: Two police officers in Gwent,  Wales have been taken off duty after they apparently smashed 70-year-old Robert Whatley's Range Rover's windows out while he was being stopped for not wearing a seatbelt on September 9th last year.
Revised: Two police officers in Gwent, w: Wales have been taken off duty after they apparently smashed 70-year-old Robert Whatley's Range Rover's windows out while he was being stopped for not wearing a seatbelt on September 9th last year.
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Original:  Whately, a retired businessman from  Usk, has suffered a stroke and takes medication for his heart condition.
Revised:  Whately, a retired businessman from w: Usk, has suffered a stroke and takes medication for his heart condition.
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Original:  He was driving away while has was being issued a  fixed penalty notice.
Revised:  He was driving away while has was being issued a w: fixed penalty notice.
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Original:  He thought that the police were finished with him, and he needed his medication, he told  Caerphilly magistrates court.
Revised:  He thought that the police were finished with him, and he needed his medication, he told w: Caerphilly magistrates court.
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Original:  Deputy Chief Constable Carmel Napier said "  Gwent Police expects the highest professional standards of its police officers and police staff at all times and we can assure Mr Whatley and the public that this matter will be thoroughly investigated.
Revised:  Deputy Chief Constable Carmel Napier said " w: Gwent Police expects the highest professional standards of its police officers and police staff at all times and we can assure Mr Whatley and the public that this matter will be thoroughly investigated.
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Original: Whately, a retired businessman from w: Usk, has suffered a stroke and takes medication for his heart condition.
Revised: Whately, a retired businessman from Usk, has suffered a stroke and takes medication for his heart condition.
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Original:  He was driving away while has was being issued a w: fixed penalty notice.
Revised:  He was driving away while has was being issued a fixed penalty notice.
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Original:  He thought that the police were finished with him, and he needed his medication, he told w: Caerphilly magistrates court.
Revised:  He thought that the police were finished with him, and he needed his medication, he told Caerphilly magistrates court.
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Original:  Deputy Chief Constable Carmel Napier said " w: Gwent Police expects the highest professional standards of its police officers and police staff at all times and we can assure Mr Whatley and the public that this matter will be thoroughly investigated.
Revised:  Deputy Chief Constable Carmel Napier said " Gwent Police expects the highest professional standards of its police officers and police staff at all times and we can assure Mr Whatley and the public that this matter will be thoroughly investigated.
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Original:  One officer went and smashed the  window with his baton, and the other jumped onto the hood to kick the windshield.
Revised:  One officer went and smashed the window with his baton, while the other jumped onto the hood to kick the windshield.
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Original:  One officer went and smashed the  window with his baton, and the other jumped onto the hood to kick the windshield.
Revised:  One officer went and smashed the window with his baton, and the other jumped on the hood and kicked the windshield.
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Original:  Whately,  a retired businessman from Usk, has suffered a stroke and takes medication for his heart condition.
Revised:  Whately, a retired businessman from Usk, suffered a stroke and takes medication for his heart condition.
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Original:   Deputy Chief Constable Carmel Napier said "Gwent Police expects the highest professional standards of its police officers and police staff at all times and we can assure Mr  Whatley and the public that this matter will be thoroughly investigated.
Revised:  Deputy Chief Constable Carmel Napier said "Gwent Police expects the highest professional standards of its police officers and police staff at all times and we can assure Mr . Whatley and the public that this matter will be thoroughly investigated.
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Original: Whately, 70, a  retired businessman from Usk,  suffered a stroke and takes medication for his heart condition.
Revised: Whately, 70, a A retired businessman from Usk, suffered a stroke and takes medication for his heart condition.
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Original:  The driver, Robert Whatley, was stopped for not wearing his seatbelt September 9, 2009.
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Original: A retired businessman from Usk, Whatley suffered a stroke and takes medication for his heart condition.
Revised: A retired businessman from Usk, Whatley is a stroke victim and takes medication for his heart condition.
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Original:  Poll: Arabs discouraged by US policies, back nuclear-armed Iran A new poll by Zogby International and the University of Maryland has found that Arabs in Egypt, Jordan, Lebanon, Morocco, Saudi Arabia and the United Arab Emirates are discouraged by US policies, have little confidence in US president Barack Obama and for the first time, a majority of poll respondents support a nuclear-armed Iran.
Revised:  A new poll by Zogby International and the University of Maryland has found that Arabs in Egypt, Jordan, Lebanon, Morocco, Saudi Arabia and the United Arab Emirates are discouraged by US policies, have little confidence in US president Barack Obama and for the first time, a majority of poll respondents support a nuclear-armed Iran.
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Original: The poll results are a stark contrast from last year's results . Last year 51\% of respondents were "optimistic" about US policy in the Middle East;
Revised: The poll results are a "stark contrast" from last year's results . Last year 51\% of respondents were "optimistic" about US policy in the Middle East;
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Original:  The poll also found that most watch Al Jazeera for their international news by a wide margin , and that over half of the respondents also watch American or European movies, shows or music videos daily
Revised:  The poll also found that most watch Al Jazeera for their international news , and that over half of the respondents also watch American or European movies, shows or music videos daily
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Original: The poll results are a "stark contrast" from last year's results, according to USA Today  Last year 51\% of respondents were "optimistic" about US policy in the Middle East;
Revised: The poll results are a "stark contrast" from last year's results, according to USA Today . Last year 51\% of respondents were "optimistic" about US policy in the Middle East;
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Original: A Tuesday service cutoff deadline in the United States for tens of thousands of VoIP customers who failed to reply to a service limitation notification from their provider was extended by 30 days  to September 28.
Revised: A Tuesday service cutoff deadline in the United States for tens of thousands of VoIP customers who failed to reply to a service limitation notification from their provider was extended by 30 days , to September 28.
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Original:  The FCC mandatethat VoIP providers ,
Revised:  In an FCC mandate, VoIP providers
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Original:  Vonage and Verizon,  send notice to customers that acknowledges the possible limitations of E911 access  . Specifically, the FCC mandated that VoIP providers must advise subscribers of the circumstances under which E911 service may not be available, and distribute stickers or other appropriate labels with a warning that E911 service may be limited or not available and instructing the subscriber to place them on or near the equipment used in conjunction with the service.
Revised:  Vonage and Verizon, were to send notice to customers that acknowledges the possible limitations of E911 access . Specifically, the FCC mandated that VoIP providers must advise subscribers of the circumstances under which E911 service may not be available, and distribute stickers or other appropriate labels with a warning that E911 service may be limited or not available and instructing the subscriber to place them on or near the equipment used in conjunction with the service.
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Original:  Vonage and Verizon,  send notice to customers that acknowledges the possible limitations of E911 access  . Specifically, the FCC mandated that VoIP providers must advise subscribers of the circumstances under which E911 service may not be available, and distribute stickers or other appropriate labels with a warning that E911 service may be limited or not available and instructing the subscriber to place them on or near the equipment used in conjunction with the service.
Revised:  Vonage and Verizon, send notice to customers asking them acknowledge the possible limitations of E911 access . Specifically, the FCC mandated that VoIP providers must advise subscribers of the circumstances under which E911 service may not be available, and distribute stickers or other appropriate labels with a warning that E911 service may be limited or not available and instructing the subscriber to place them on or near the equipment used in conjunction with the service.
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Original:  Vonage and Verizon,  send notice to customers that acknowledges the possible limitations of E911 access  . Specifically, the FCC mandated that VoIP providers must advise subscribers of the circumstances under which E911 service may not be available, and distribute stickers or other appropriate labels with a warning that E911 service may be limited or not available and instructing the subscriber to place them on or near the equipment used in conjunction with the service.
Revised:  Vonage and Verizon, send notice to customers that acknowledges the possible limitations of E911 access . Specifically, the FCC mandated that VoIP providers must advise subscribers of the circumstances under which E911 service may not be available, and distribute stickers or other appropriate labels with a warning that E911 service may be limited or not available , and instruct the subscriber to place them on or near the equipment used in conjunction with the service.
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Original:  Lastly, the provider is to obtain and keep a record of affirmative acknowledgement by every subscriber, both new and existing   .
Revised:  Lastly, the provider is to obtain and keep a record of affirmative acknowledgement by every subscriber, both new and existing . .
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Original:  For some customer , it was suspected that if the VoIP service was ended, they would have no phone service.
Revised:  For some customers , it was suspected that if the VoIP service was ended, they would have no phone service.
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Original:  For some customer , it was suspected that if the VoIP service was ended, they would have no phone service.
Revised:  For some customer , it was feared that if the VoIP service was ended, they would have no phone service.
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Original:  The Palestinian news agency, WAFA, has issued a statement commending this as "a terrorist attack.”
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Original:  This action , which is expected to pass in a special  Parliament session on Wednesday, will allow Israel to pull all its soldiers out of Gaza in the next month.
Revised:  A final vote , which is expected to pass in a special Parliament session on Wednesday, will allow Israel to pull all its soldiers out of Gaza in the next month.
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Original:  This action , which is expected to pass in a special  Parliament session on Wednesday, will allow Israel to pull all its soldiers out of Gaza in the next month.
Revised:  This action , which is expected to pass in a special Israeli Parliament session on Wednesday, will allow Israel to pull all its soldiers out of Gaza in the next month.
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Original: ]] Robert G. Heft, the designer of the first fifty-star United States flag,  has put his original design up for sale on the popular auction website eBay.
Revised: ]] The designer of the first fifty-star United States flag, has put his original design up for sale on the popular auction website eBay.
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Original: ]] Robert G. Heft, the designer of the first fifty-star United States flag,  has put his original design up for sale on the popular auction website eBay.
Revised: ]] Robert G. Heft, the designer of the first fifty-star United States flag, has put his original creation up for sale on the popular auction website eBay.
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Original:  Sixty-three  year old Heft states that medical bills, as well as tuition costs for his relatives, are becoming an economical burden and hopes that selling the flag for  $250,000 US will help 
Revised:  Sixty-three year old Heft states that medical bills, as well as tuition costs for his relatives, are becoming an economical burden . $250,000 US will help 
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Original:  His design was adopted as the new flag in 1960 , and his grade was promptly changed to an "A".
Revised:  His design was adopted as the new flag in 1960 and his grade was promptly changed to an "A".
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Original:  The flag has been flown over all state capitol buildings , and over 80 United States embassies.
Revised:  The flag has been flown over all state capitol buildings and over 80 United States embassies.
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Original:  63 year old Heft states that medical bills, as well as tuition costs for his relatives, are becoming an economical burden.
Revised:  Sixty-three year-old Heft explained that medical bills, as well as tuition costs for his relatives, are becoming an economical burden.
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Original:  63 year old Heft states that medical bills, as well as tuition costs for his relatives, are becoming an economical burden.
Revised:  63 year old Heft states that medical bills, as well as tuition costs for his relatives, are becoming an economic burden.
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Original:  The opening bid on the flag starts at $250,000 US dollars, and the auction lasts until Monday.
Revised:  The opening bid on the flag starts at $250,000 USD and the auction lasts until Monday.
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Original: Heft has also designed a 51-star US flag, which is currently in possession of Representative Clarence Miller, a Republican from Ohio .
Revised: Heft has also designed a 51-star US flag, which is currently in possession of Representative Clarence Miller, a Republican from Ohio 
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Original:  Polish politician Bronisław Komorowski has been sworn in as president of Poland after winning the presidency in the presidential runoff election of July 4. Komorowski belongs to the Civic Platform Party and won the presidential runoff by a margin of 53\% to 47\% against Jarosław Kaczyński, who is from the Law and Justice party.
Revised:  as president of Poland after winning the presidency in the presidential runoff election of July 4. Komorowski belongs to the Civic Platform Party and won the presidential runoff by a margin of 53\% to 47\% against Jarosław Kaczyński, who is from the Law and Justice party.
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Original:  "The democratic institutional order we have built in Poland for over 20 years of change has shown that in these difficult times, we have been able to ensure continuity of the state to tax and proudly pays tribute to disaster victims," Komorowski said  
Revised:  "The democratic institutional order we have built in Poland for over 20 years of change has shown that in these difficult times, we have been able to ensure continuity of the state to tax and proudly pays tribute to disaster victims," Komorowski said . 
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Original:  "The democratic institutional order we have built in Poland for over 20 years of change has shown that in these difficult times, we have been able to ensure continuity of the state to tax and proudly pays tribute to disaster victims," Komorowski said  
Revised:  "The democratic institutional order we have built in Poland for over 20 years of change has shown that in these difficult times, we have been able to ensure continuity of the state to tax and proudly pays tribute to disaster victims," Komorowski said Sister linke
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Original: The hoax was originally reported by AAP, who checked the claim with a provided number on the press release before publishing it.
Revised: The hoax was originally reported by AAP, who checked the claim with a telephone number provided on the press release before publishing it.
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Original:   The plans for the mass gathering were thrown into turmoil over the last few weeks when police refused permission for the protest to occur near the Opera House, and declared the entire Opera House forecourt to be off-limits for the duration of the conference.
Revised:  thumb The plans for the mass gathering were thrown into turmoil over the last few weeks when police refused permission for the protest to occur near the Opera House, and declared the entire Opera House forecourt to be off-limits for the duration of the conference.
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Original:  said the 30A Network website. thumb The plans for the mass gathering were thrown into turmoil over the last few weeks when police refused permission for the protest to occur near the Opera House, and declared the entire Opera House forecourt to be off-limits for the duration of the conference.
Revised:  said the 30A Network website. The plans for the mass gathering were thrown into turmoil over the last few weeks when police refused permission for the protest to occur near the Opera House, and declared the entire Opera House forecourt to be off-limits for the duration of the conference.
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Original:  Image:Leh District.svg|Leh district in Jammu and Kashmir, India
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Original: Five hundred people are missing and as many as 150 are reported to have been killed by flash floods in India, caused by a sudden cloudburst that hit Indian controlled Kashmir on Friday.
Revised: Five hundred people are missing and as many as 150 are reported to have been killed by flash floods in India, caused by a sudden cloudburst that hit Indian-controlled Kashmir on Friday.
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Original:  The downpour struck the town of Leh and several surrounding village , and reportedly caused a mud slide that hit the refugee-populated village of Choglamsar.
Revised:  The downpour struck the town of Leh and several surrounding villages , and reportedly caused a mud slide that hit the refugee-populated village of Choglamsar.
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Original:  The Associated Press wrote that at least five foreign tourists were among those killed.
Revised:  Associated Press reported that at least five foreign tourists were among those killed.
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Original:  Almost any CN terminal that has a clerk working at it with access to the CN Intranet can get this information within minutes  
Revised:  Almost any CN terminal that has a clerk working at it with access to the CN Intranet can get this information within minutes . 
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Original:  CN to cancel the Health and Safety plan that they have with employees...
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Original:  The CAW will be going to Arbitration this fall to address the issue.
Revised:  The CAW will be going to arbitration this fall to address the issue.
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Original:  Safe Intermodal Trains Getting Out On Time....
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Original:  We have lost 5-6 full time positionsat our terminal.
Revised:  One terminal has lost 5-6 full time positionsat our terminal.
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Original:  We used to have part time positions filled also , but at this time there are no part time employees to cover work if a permanent employee is absent.
Revised:  We used to have part-time positions filled as well , but at this time there are no part time employees to cover work if a permanent employee is absent.
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Original:  We used to have part time positions filled also , but at this time there are no part time employees to cover work if a permanent employee is absent.
Revised:  We used to have part time positions filled also , but at this time there are no part-time employees to cover work if a permanent employee is absent.
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Original:  Overtime is a must right now to keep the trains running on time.
Revised:  Overtime is necessary to keep the trains running on time.
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Original:  They expect the trains to go out on time, and in a safe condition, but staff is overworked, because there are not enough of us.
Revised:  CN Rail expects the trains to go out on time, and in a safe condition, but staff is overworked, because there are not enough of us.
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Original:  I noticed that most of the rail cars that contained 40 foot steamship (overseas ) containers did not have their loading guides in place.
Revised:  I noticed that most of the rail cars that contained 40 foot overseas containers did not have their loading guides in place.
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Original:  Trains are not supposed to be allowed to go out without these guides placed into the cars (the guides stop the loads from swaying from side to side in the cars), important for safety with double stacked containers  .
Revised:  Trains are not allowed to go out without these guides placed into the cars (the guides stop the loads from swaying from side to side in the cars), important for safety with double stacked containers .
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Original:  On August 3rd 2005 there was a derailment in Wabamun Lake Alberta , that spilled toxins into the lake.
Revised:  On August 3rd 2005 there was a derailment in Wabamun Lake Alberta that spilled toxins into the lake.
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Original:  The Conductor on each train carries with him the shipping manifest with him and has access to that information right away .
Revised:  The Conductor on each train carries with him the shipping manifest with him and has access to that information at all times .
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