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Original: frame| This NASA animation shows Long Island, NY-sized iceberg B15A on a colission course with the Drygalski Ice Tongue on the Antarctic coast.
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Original: frame| This NASA animation shows Long Island, NY-sized iceberg B15A on a colission course with the Drygalski Ice Tongue on the Antarctic coast.
Revised: frame| This NASA animation shows Long Island, NY-sized iceberg B15A is on a collision course with the Drygalski Ice Tongue on the Antarctic coast.
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Original:  (NASA animation) The Drygalski Ice Tongue on Antarctica's coastline may be bitten off this week by a huge iceberg which is on a collision course with the floating glacier tongue.
Revised:  (NASA animation) The on Antarctica's coastline may be bitten off this week by a huge iceberg which is on a collision course with the floating glacier tongue.
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Original:  Antarctic scientists, at the nearby McMurdo Research Station, are watching the movement of iceberg B15A, a remnant of the Ross Ice Shelf , which partially broke apart five years ago.
Revised:  Antarctic scientists, at the nearby McMurdo Research Station, are watching the movement of iceberg B15A, a remnant of the , which partially broke apart five years ago.
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Original:  The 100-mile-long , 1,200 square mile iceberg is affecting wildlife in the area – particularly that of penguins, which are in their breeding season.
Revised:  The 100--long , 1,200 square mile iceberg is affecting wildlife in the area – particularly that of penguins, which are in their breeding season.
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Original: Chantelle Houghton has won the British reality TV show  Celebrity Big Brother  . Michael Barrymore came in second place.
Revised: Chantelle Houghton has won the British reality TV show w: Celebrity Big Brother . Michael Barrymore came in second place.
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Original:  Also evicted on the 27th were: Chantelle Houghton (non-celebrity promotions girl and  Paris Hilton look-a-like) - Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of  The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from  Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Place
Revised:  Also evicted on the 27th were: Chantelle Houghton (non-celebrity promotions girl and w: Paris Hilton look-a-like) - Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Place
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Original:  Also evicted on the 27th were: Chantelle Houghton (non-celebrity promotions girl and  Paris Hilton look-a-like) - Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of  The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from  Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Place
Revised:  Also evicted on the 27th were: Chantelle Houghton (non-celebrity promotions girl and Paris Hilton look-a-like) - Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of w: The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Place
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Original:  Also evicted on the 27th were: Chantelle Houghton (non-celebrity promotions girl and  Paris Hilton look-a-like) - Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of  The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from  Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Place
Revised:  Also evicted on the 27th were: Chantelle Houghton (non-celebrity promotions girl and Paris Hilton look-a-like) - Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from w: Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Place
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Original:  Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Place Category:Europe Category:Culture and entertainme
Revised:  Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Category:Europe Category:Culture and entertainme
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Original:  Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Place Category:Europe Category:Culture and entertainme
Revised:  Winner Michael Barrymore (television broadcaster and comedian) - Runner Up: 2nd Place Maggot (member of Goldie Lookin' Chain) - Runner Up: 3rd Place Samuel Preston (lead singer of The Ordinary Boys) - Runner Up: 4th Place Pete Burns (former Dead or Alive singer) - Runner Up: 5th Place Traci Bingham (actress from Baywatch and model) - Runner Up: 6th Place Plac
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Original:  Officals have not yet reported any injuries or deaths in the region   . Earthquakes freqently take place in the area due to it being positioned on a volcanically active region referred to as The Ring of Fire . category:Indonesia category:East Timor Category:Disasters and acciden
Revised:  Officals have not yet reported any injuries or deaths in the region . Earthquakes freqently take place in the area due to it being positioned on a volcanically active region referred to as The Ring of Fire category:Indonesia category:East Timor Category:Disasters and acciden
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Original:  Officals have not yet reported any injuries or deaths in the region   . Earthquakes freqently take place in the area due to it being positioned on a volcanically active region referred to as The Ring of Fire . category:Indonesia category:East Timor Category:Disasters and acciden
Revised:  Officals have not yet reported any injuries or deaths in the region . Earthquakes freqently take place in the area due to it being positioned on a volcanically active region referred to as The Ring of Fire . 
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Original: Back in December of 2004, a major earthquake with a magnitude of 9.0 struck just off the coast of Sumatra, triggering a major tsunami, killing nearly 300,000 people and leaving even more homeless.
Revised: In December of 2004, a major earthquake with a magnitude of 9.0 struck just off the coast of Sumatra, triggering a major tsunami, killing nearly 300,000 people and leaving even more homeless.
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Original: Back in December of 2004, a major earthquake with a magnitude of 9.0 struck just off the coast of Sumatra, triggering a major tsunami, killing nearly 300,000 people and leaving even more homeless.
Revised: Back in December of 2004, a major earthquake with a magnitude of 9.0 struck just off the coast of Sumatra, triggering a major tsunami, killing nearly 300,000 people and leaving millions more homeless.
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Original:  Earthquakes freqently take place in the area due to it being positioned on a volcanically active region referred to as  The Ring of Fire
Revised:  Earthquakes freqently take place in the area due to it being positioned on a volcanically active region referred to as the The Ring of Fire
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Original:  It originated from the Banda Sea, roughly 195 kilometers from Ambon city .
Revised:  It originated from the Banda Sea, roughly 195 kilometers from Ambon City .
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Original:  A major earthquake occured at 1:58AM Saturday off the coast of Indonesia.
Revised:  A major earthquake occurred at 1:58AM Saturday off the coast of Indonesia.
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Original:  The earthquake measured 7.7 on the Richter Scale and occured at a depth of about 341 kilometers said the U.S. Geological Survey.
Revised:  The earthquake measured 7.7 on the Richter Scale and occurred at a depth of about 341 kilometers said the U.S. Geological Survey.
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Original:  Earthquakes freqently take place in the area due to it being positioned on a volcanically active region referred to as the The Ring of Fire
Revised:  Earthquakes frequently take place in the area due to it being positioned on a volcanically active region referred to as the The Ring of Fire
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Original: But good news came as the Pacific Tsunami Warning Canter said in an e-mail advisory, "this earthquake is located outside the Pacific.
Revised: But good news came as the Pacific Tsunami Warning Center said in an e-mail advisory, "this earthquake is located outside the Pacific.
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Original: The customers are given access to software to mark notes on the manuscripts  to expose errors  or make suggestions.
Revised: Customers are given access to software to mark notes on the manuscripts to expose errors or make suggestions.
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Original: The customers are given access to software to mark notes on the manuscripts  to expose errors  or make suggestions.
Revised: The customers are given access to software to that allows them to make notes on the manuscripts to expose errors or make suggestions.
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Original: The customers are given access to software to mark notes on the manuscripts  to expose errors  or make suggestions.
Revised: The customers are given access to software to mark notes on the manuscripts , to expose errors or make suggestions.
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Original: The customers are given access to software to mark notes on the manuscripts  to expose errors  or make suggestions.
Revised: The customers are given access to software to mark notes on the manuscripts to expose errors , or make suggestions.
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Original:  The project is intended to improve the content, finding technical errors and making sure the examples make sense and are relevant, rather than proofreading.
Revised:  The project is intended to improve the content, find technical errors and making sure the examples make sense and are relevant, rather than proofreading.
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Original:  The project is intended to improve the content, finding technical errors and making sure the examples make sense and are relevant, rather than proofreading.
Revised:  The project is intended to improve the content, finding technical errors and make sure that examples make sense and are relevant, rather than proofreading.
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Original:  Customers get an "evolving manuscript , "  a manuscript that hasn't "been fully edited, subjected to final technical review, or formatted for print."
Revised:  Customers get an "evolving manuscript " a manuscript that hasn't "been fully edited, subjected to final technical review, or formatted for print."
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Original:  Customers get an "evolving manuscript , "  a manuscript that hasn't "been fully edited, subjected to final technical review, or formatted for print."
Revised:  Customers get an "evolving manuscript , " , a manuscript that hasn't "been fully edited, subjected to final technical review, or formatted for print."
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Original:  The books will become available between two to six months prior to the intended publication date  
Revised:  The books will become available between two to six months prior to the intended publication date . 
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Original:  The probe, which the  European Space Agency (ESA) began developing 17 years ago, has worked well with only minor system failures.
Revised:  The probe, which the w: European Space Agency (ESA) began developing 17 years ago, has worked well with only minor system failures.
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Original:  The probe, which the  European Space Agency (ESA) began developing 17 years ago, has worked well with only minor system failures.
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Original:  "This is a great achievement for Europe and its US partners in this ambitious international endeavor to explore the Saturnian system", said Jean-Jacques Dordain, the Director General of the ESA%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The first confirmation that Huygens had successfully entered Titan's thick atmosphere was at 10:25 a.m.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The first confirmation that Huygens had successfully entered Titan's thick atmosphere was at 10:25 a.m.
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Original:  Huygens broadcast data to its Cassini mothership (the US probe which carried Huygens to Titan) throughout its descent and then from the surface . After Cassini dropped below the horizon of Titan (cutting the radio link), Cassini turned towards Earth to begin transmitting its recording of the Huygens data to the European Space Operations Centre in Darmstadt, Germany.
Revised:  |European . After Cassini dropped below the horizon of Titan (cutting the radio link), Cassini turned towards Earth to begin transmitting its recording of the Huygens data to the European Space Operations Centre in Darmstadt, Germany.
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Original: 180px|Artist's rendering of the Huygens probe descending through Titan's atmosphere Huygens, the European built Titan exploration probe, ended its seven-year voyage today when it landed on the surface of the second largest moon in the solar system at 11:38 a.m. UTC.
Revised:  Huygens, the European built Titan exploration probe, ended its seven-year voyage today when it landed on the surface of the second largest moon in the solar system at 11:38 a.m. UTC.
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Original:  Maduro established himself as a hardliner towards gang violence in Honduras, most notably  the highly dangerous Mara Salvatrucha gang.
Revised:  Maduro established himself as a hardliner towards gang violence in Honduras, most notably regarding the highly dangerous Mara Salvatrucha gang.
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Original:  While he did a great deal to cut down on violence in his term, he also drew sharp criticisms from human rights groups for his methods, which did not include the use of rehabiliation programs.
Revised:  While he did a great deal to crack down on violence in his term, he also drew sharp criticisms from human rights groups for his methods, which did not include the use of rehabiliation programs.
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Original:  He has also worked in engineering, in addition to his successful careers in agriculture and politic 
Revised:  He has also worked in engineering, in addition to his successful careers in agriculture and politics. 
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Original:  He has also worked in engineering, in addition to his successful careers in agriculture and politics . Category:Politics and conflictsCategory:HondurasCategory:Central Ameri
Revised:  He has also worked in engineering, in addition to his successful careers in agriculture and politics Category:Politics and conflictsCategory:HondurasCategory:Central Ameri
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Original:  He has also worked in engineering, in addition to his successful careers in agriculture and politics . Category:Politics and conflictsCategory:HondurasCategory:Central Ameri
Revised:  He has also worked in engineering, in addition to his successful careers in agriculture and politics . 
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Original: Yesterday saw the inauguration of a new president of Honduras in Tegucigalpa, the nation's capitol .
Revised: Yesterday saw the inauguration of a new president of Honduras in Tegucigalpa, the nation's capital .
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Original:  He has also worked in engineering, in addition to his successful careers in agriculture and politics  
Revised:  He has also worked in engineering, in addition to his successful careers in agriculture and politics . 
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Original:  The FDA has issued guidelines that the inhalable form should not be used by smokers, patients with asthma, bronchitis, or emphysema as tests have shown that its use can reduce the vital capacity of the lungs.
Revised:  The FDA has issued guidelines that the inhalable form should not be used by smokers, patients with asthma, bronchitis, or emphysema as tests have shown that its use can reduce the breathing capacity of the lungs.
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Original:  Safety studies of short-term use have been completed and the those for long-term use are underway.
Revised:  Safety studies of short-term use and studies of the effects over long-term use are underway.
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Original:  The FDA has given its approval on the basis of safety studies of short-term use and studies of the effects over long-term use are underway.
Revised:  The FDA has given its approval on the basis of safety studies of short-term use and studies of its effects over long-term use are underway.
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Original: The United States Food and Drug Administration (FDA) approved the use of an Inhalable form of Insulin for treating both forms of Diabetes in adults.
Revised: The United States Food and Drug Administration (FDA) approved the use of an inhalable form of insulin for treating both forms of Diabetes in adults.
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Original: The United States Food and Drug Administration (FDA) approved the use of an Inhalable form of Insulin for treating both forms of Diabetes in adults.
Revised: The United States Food and Drug Administration (FDA) approved the use of an Inhalable form of Insulin for treating both forms of diabetes in adults.
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Original:  Insulin has been used for the treatment of Diabetes for many years now, but some patients find it difficult to use it as it has to be injected into the body, usually more than once a day.
Revised:  Insulin has been used for the treatment of diabetes for many years now, but some patients find it difficult to use it as it has to be injected into the body, usually more than once a day.
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Original:  The use of any form of Insulin can cause blood sugar to drop below safe levels, a condition called Hypoglycemia .
Revised:  The use of any form of insulin can cause blood sugar to drop below safe levels, a condition called Hypoglycemia .
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Original:  The use of any form of Insulin can cause blood sugar to drop below safe levels, a condition called Hypoglycemia .
Revised:  The use of any form of Insulin can cause blood sugar to drop below safe levels, a condition called hypoglycemia .
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Original:  So the use of Insulin must be accompanied by a careful and regular monitoring of blood sugar levels.
Revised:  So the use of insulin must be accompanied by a careful and regular monitoring of blood sugar levels.
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Original:  Pfizer has said the product wouldn't be widely available until June or July and that Exact prices haven't been set.
Revised:  Pfizer has said the product wouldn't be widely available until June or July and that exact prices haven't been set.
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Original:  A Pfizer spokesperson has said that the price will be " comptetitive " to Injected Insulin
Revised:  A Pfizer spokesperson has said that the price will be " competitive " to Injected Insulin
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Original:  A Pfizer spokesperson has said that the price will be " comptetitive " to Injected Insulin
Revised:  A Pfizer spokesperson has said that the price will be " comptetitive " to injected insulin
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Original: Insulin  has been used for the treatment of diabetes for many years now, but some patients find it difficult to use it as it has to be injected into the body, usually more than once a day.
Revised: Insulin is a hormone produced by the pancreas that, when released into the blood, controls the upper limits of glucose presence in the bloodstream. Diabetics cannot produce insulin on their own, and if they cannot get it from another source, they will not be able to rid their body of excess glucose, and will fall into diabetic shock, which can be fatal. Insulin has been used for the treatment of diabetes for many years now, but some patients find it difficult to use it as it has to be injected into the body, usually more than once a day.
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Original: Insulin  has been used for the treatment of diabetes for many years now, but some patients find it difficult to use it as it has to be injected into the body, usually more than once a day.
Revised: Insulin has been used for the treatment of diabetes for many years now, but some patients find it difficult to use it as it has to be injected into the body, usually several times a day.
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Original:  Diabetics cannot produce insulin on their own, and if they cannot get it from another source, they will not be able to rid their body of excess glucose, and will fall into diabetic shock, which can be fatal.
Revised:  Diabetics cannot produce insulin on their own, and have to control their blood sugars by appropriate diet, exercise and medication. Untreated Diabetes can have a serious adverse effect on health, it can lead to higher risk of cardiovascular disease, kidney failure, retinal damage and diabetic shock, which can be fatal.
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Original: U.S. Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld acknowledged in a public document that the Pentagon's information packages meant for foreign consumption are often "consumed by our domestic audience."
Revised: U.S. Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld acknowledged in a document called the "Information Operations Roadmap" that the Pentagon's information packages meant for foreign consumption are often "consumed by our domestic audience."
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Original:  Di Rita said  The document Rumsfeld was referring to said  in part;"
Revised:  Di Rita said . The document Rumsfeld was referring to said in part;"
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Original: The likelihood that PSYOP messages will be replayed to a much broader audience, including the American public, requires specific boundaries be established," the document stated  
Revised: The likelihood that PSYOP messages will be replayed to a much broader audience, including the American public, requires specific boundaries be established," the document stated . 
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Original: The likelihood that PSYOP messages will be replayed to a much broader audience, including the American public, requires specific boundaries be established," the document stated  
Revised: The likelihood that PSYOP messages will be replayed to a much broader audience, including the American public, requires specific boundaries be established," the document stated External lin
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