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Original: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is preparing to test an ICBM , the new Taepodong 2  missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles which  could reach the United States mainland.
Revised: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is preparing to test an ICBM , the new Taepodong 2 missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles . could reach the United States mainland.
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Original: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is prepared to test an ICBM called Taepodong 2, a missile which is suspected of having a range of 3,500 miles.
Revised: South Korean Foreign Minister Ban Ki-moon says that North Korea is prepared to test an intercontinental ballistic missile with an estimated range of 3,500 miles.
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Original:  A missile with such a range could reach the United States mainland.
Revised:  A missile with such a range reach the United States mainland.
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Original:  He also said that the preparations could be "quite worrisome", but also said that the U.S. and other nations should not "make a conclusion" that N. Korea will test the misile .
Revised:  He also said that the preparations could be "quite worrisome", but also said that the U.S. and other nations should not "make a conclusion" that N. Korea will test the missile .
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Original: Those detained at the centre are mostly men who have sought asylum in the UK and who's asylum applications have been rejected.
Revised: Those detained at the centre are mostly men who have sought asylum in the UK and whose asylum applications have been rejected.
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Original:  A letter from the hunger strikers explaining why they are seaking to draw attention to their plight in this way has been reproduced in full below.
Revised:  A letter from the hunger strikers explaining why they are seeking to draw attention to their plight in this way has been reproduced in full below.
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Original:  It is managed on behalf of the UK Government by Global Solutions Limited, and has a capacity of 198.
Revised:  It was managed on behalf of the UK Government by Global Solutions Limited, and has a capacity of 198.
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Original:  At the start of the second half, Zagame scored both her goals to take the Australian side up 6-3 . Lauren Wenger led the United States side with two goals scored, while Betsey Armstrong made 14 saves in goal .
Revised:  At the start of the second half, Zagame scored both her goals to take the Australian side up 6-3 Lauren Wenger led the United States side with two goals scored, while Betsey Armstrong made 14 saves in goal .
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Original:  At the start of the second half, Zagame scored both her goals to take the Australian side up 6-3 . Lauren Wenger led the United States side with two goals scored, while Betsey Armstrong made 14 saves in goal .
Revised:  At the start of the second half, Zagame scored both her goals to take the Australian side up 6-3 . .
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Original:  The win is big for Australia going into the 2012 Summer Olympics, signalling to other teams that they are a potential medal threat .
Revised:  Australia is now widely considered a serious medal contender for the upcoming .
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Original: In goal for Australia, performed well, blocking a key penalty shot, and was assisted by who scored led the side with two goals in the victory over the United States.
Revised: In goal for Australia, performed well, blocking a key penalty shot, and was assisted by who scored two goals in the victory over the United States.
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Original:  NATIONAL INSTITUTES OF HEALTH ScienceDai
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Original:   "With little or no nicotine reaching the brain, smoking is less rewarding.
Revised:  When tobacco smoke is inhaled, the chemical nicotine enters the bloodstream. The blood affected by nicotine eventually enters the brain, triggering neuro-receptors to react and cause addiction. This vaccine would produce antibodies to identify the nicotine molecule and prevent it from reaching the brain. "With little or no nicotine reaching the brain, smoking is less rewarding.
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Original:  That gives the smoker a chance to change the behavioral and social factors that also influence smoking," said Victor Reus, MD, principal investigator for the study at UCSF  
Revised:  That gives the smoker a chance to change the behavioral and social factors that also influence smoking," said Victor Reus, MD, principal investigator for the study at UCSF . 
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Original:  Tobacco users are being invited by the University of California, San Francisco's Habit Abatement Clinic to test NicVax, a new vaccine being developed by Nabi Biopharmaceuticals.
Revised: University of California, San Francisco Tobacco users are being invited by the University of California, San Francisco's Habit Abatement Clinic to test NicVax, a new vaccine being developed by Nabi Biopharmaceuticals.
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Original: The broadcasters: TVNZ, CanWest, Maori TV , the TAB and Radio New Zealand have forged an alliance called Freeview which has leased sattelite space for the digital television.
Revised: The broadcasters: TVNZ, CanWest, Māori Television , the TAB and Radio New Zealand have forged an alliance called Freeview which has leased sattelite space for the digital television.
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Original: The broadcasters: TVNZ, CanWest, Maori TV , the TAB and Radio New Zealand have forged an alliance called Freeview which has leased sattelite space for the digital television.
Revised: The broadcasters: TVNZ, CanWest, Maori TV , the TAB and Radio New Zealand have forged an alliance called Freeview which has leased satellite space for the digital television.
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Original:  Digital television will mean viewers can recieve a crisper picture, clearer radio signals, limited reception problems, and more channels.
Revised:  Digital television will mean viewers can receive a crisper picture, clearer radio signals, limited reception problems, and more channels.
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Original:  It will require television viewers to buy a set top box, similar to the Sky TV decoder.
Revised:  It will require television viewers to buy a set top box, similar to the SKY Network Television decoder.
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Original:  Some viewers in some areas will need to buy a satelite dish as well.
Revised:  Some viewers in some areas will need to buy a satellite dish as well.
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Original:  The approximated cost will be $200 or, with a dish, $400 (NZD),  there is no subscription costs, unlike Sky TV . New Zealand is one of the last developed countries to make the switch to digital.
Revised:  The approximated cost will be $200 or, with a dish, $400 (NZD), however there is no subscription costs, unlike Sky TV . New Zealand is one of the last developed countries to make the switch to digital.
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Original:  The approximated cost will be $200 or, with a dish, $400 (NZD),  there is no subscription costs, unlike Sky TV . New Zealand is one of the last developed countries to make the switch to digital.
Revised:  The approximated cost will be $200 or, with a dish, $400 (NZD), there is no subscription costs, unlike Sky Television . New Zealand is one of the last developed countries to make the switch to digital.
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Original:  Analouge will be switched off between 2012 and 2016
Revised:  Analogue will be switched off between 2012 and 2016
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Original:  It will require television viewers to buy a set top box, similar to the SKY Network Television decoder.
Revised:  FreeView will require television viewers to buy a set top box, similar to the SKY Network Television decoder.
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Original:  The approximated cost will be $200 or, with a dish, $400 (NZD) , however there is no subscription costs , unlike Sky Television.
Revised:  The approximated cost will be $200 or, with a dish, $400 (NZD) . However, there is no subscription costs , unlike Sky Television.
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Original:  The approximated cost will be $200 or, with a dish, $400 (NZD) , however there is no subscription costs , unlike Sky Television.
Revised:  The approximated cost will be $200 or, with a dish, $400 (NZD) , however there is no subscription cost , unlike Sky Television.
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Original: Mr Bashir said that the Islamic militants involved in the 2002 Bali Bombing has taken the wrong path, but stopped short of condeming their actions.
Revised: Mr Bashir said that the Islamic militants involved in the 2002 Bali Bombing has taken the wrong path, but stopped short of condemning their actions.
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Original: Helen Coonan, Australia's minister for communications announced on Wednesday that the Howard government would be introducing legislation into parliament to restrict access to inappropriate or harmful material on so-called "emerging content services".
Revised: Helen Coonan, Australia's minister for communications announced on Wednesday that the Howard government planned on introducing legislation into parliament to restrict access to inappropriate or harmful material on so-called "emerging content services".
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Original: Helen Coonan, Australia's minister for communications announced on Wednesday that the Howard government would be introducing legislation into parliament to restrict access to inappropriate or harmful material on so-called "emerging content services".
Revised: Helen Coonan, Australia's minister for communications announced on Wednesday that the Howard government would be introducing legislation into parliament restricting access to inappropriate or harmful material on so-called "emerging content services".
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Original:  Senator Coonan said in a statement that the government was supportive of the new technology, but such technology requires safeguards to ensure that children are not exposed to inappropriate content.
Revised:  Senator Coonan said in a statement that the government was supportive of new technology, but such technology requires safeguards to ensure that children are not exposed to inappropriate content.
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Original:  Senator Coonan said in a statement that the government was supportive of the new technology, but such technology requires safeguards to ensure that children are not exposed to inappropriate content.
Revised:  Senator Coonan said in a statement that the government was supportive of the new technology, but felt that the technology requires safeguards to ensure that children are not exposed to inappropriate content.
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Original:  Speaking of the proposed legislation expected to be introduced to parliament , the minister said “It will extend the current safeguards that apply to content delivered over the Internet or television to be applied to content delivered over convergent devices," The report, received by the government in April  found that the differences between television, print, radio and internet media would be blurred by devices such as 3G mobile phones and wireless internet access.
Revised:  Speaking of the proposed legislation , the minister said “It will extend the current safeguards that apply to content delivered over the Internet or television to be applied to content delivered over convergent devices," The report, received by the government in April found that the differences between television, print, radio and internet media would be blurred by devices such as 3G mobile phones and wireless internet access.
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Original:  Speaking of the proposed legislation expected to be introduced to parliament , the minister said “It will extend the current safeguards that apply to content delivered over the Internet or television to be applied to content delivered over convergent devices," The report, received by the government in April  found that the differences between television, print, radio and internet media would be blurred by devices such as 3G mobile phones and wireless internet access.
Revised:  Speaking of the proposed legislation expected to be introduced to parliament , the minister said “It will extend the current safeguards that apply to content delivered over the Internet or television to be applied to content delivered over convergent devices," The report, received by the government in April , found that the differences between television, print, radio and internet media would be blurred by devices such as 3G mobile phones and wireless internet access.
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Original:  It suggested that the government regulate based on the amount of control service providers have over content and not on the method by which the material is delivered .
Revised:  It suggested that the government regulate based on the amount of control service providers have over content instead of via the method used to access it .
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Original:  The report did however express concern about mobile chat services, claiming they could be used by paedophiles to target children.
Revised:  The report did however express concern about mobile chat services, claiming they could be used by pedophiles to target children.
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Original:  The report found that it would be more difficult for parents to supervise their children's internet chat behaviour as they would be able to access the service from anywhere.
Revised:  The report found it would be more difficult for parents to supervise their children's internet chat behaviour as they would be able to access the service from anywhere.
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Original:  The report found that it would be more difficult for parents to supervise their children's internet chat behaviour as they would be able to access the service from anywhere.
Revised:  The report found that it would be more difficult for parents to supervise their children's internet chat behaviour as they would have access to the service from anywhere.
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Original:  The report said that this concern could be countered by the fact that mobile users are easier to identify than users on the internet  .
Revised:  The report said this could be countered by the fact that mobile users are easier to identify than users on the internet .
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Original:  The report also suggested that internet access via mobile telephones be limited to customers under the age of 18, unless they have permission from their parent or guardian.
Revised:  The report also suggested that internet access via mobile telephones be limited to customers over the age of 18, unless they have permission from their parent or guardian.
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Original:  The report also suggested that internet access via mobile telephones be limited to customers under the age of 18, unless they have permission from their parent or guardian.
Revised:  The report also suggested that internet access via mobile telephones be limited to customers under the age of 18, unless minors have permission from their parent or guardian.
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Original: Helen Coonan, Australia's minister for communications announced on Wednesday that the Howard government planned on introducing legislation into parliament restricting access to inappropriate or harmful material on so-called "emerging content services".
Revised: Helen Coonan, Australia's communications minister announced on Wednesday that the Howard government planned on introducing legislation into parliament restricting access to inappropriate or harmful material on so-called "emerging content services".
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Original:  Users get mapping data from TeleAtlas and Navteq, according to information shown on the mapping site.
Revised:  Google uses mapping data from TeleAtlas and Navteq, according to information shown on the mapping site.
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Original: Google Inc. on Tuesday rolled out a test version of its mapping service — a type of service long offered by its rivals Yahoo and Microsoft.
Revised: Microsoft Inc. on Tuesday rolled out a test version of its mapping service — a type of service long offered by its rivals Yahoo and Microsoft.
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Original:  Google uses mapping data from TeleAtlas and Navteq, according to information shown on the mapping site.
Revised:  Microsoft uses mapping data from TeleAtlas and Navteq, according to information shown on the mapping site.
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Original: 230px A memorial dedicated to Oklahomans killed in the war on terrorism is planned for just north of the Oklahoma Capitol.
Revised:  A memorial dedicated to Oklahomans killed in the war on terrorism is planned for just north of the Oklahoma Capitol.
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Original:  He shot hard from an angle inside the penalty area and beat Porra on his near post.
Revised:  He shot hard from an angle inside the penalty area and beat Porras on his near post.
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Original:  No match fora solid-looking team who got its second consecutive World Cup shut out and will play Germany for the honour of Group A winner, on June 20.
Revised:  No match for a solid-looking team who got its second consecutive World Cup shut out and will play Germany for the honour of Group A winner, on June 20.
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Original:  A save from Porras, a header wide, and finally the striker connected for a beautiful far post volley, finishing off another Edison Mendez cross.
Revised:  A save from Porras, a header wide, and finally the striker connected for a beautiful far post volley, finishing off another Mendez cross.
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Original:  but the striker, again running in unmarked in front of Porras, did stab at the ball and skewed it wide.
Revised:  but the striker, who had ran in unmarked in front of Porras, did stab at the ball and skewed it wide.
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Original: The strike of the student has been backed by the Greek General Confederation of Labour(GSEE), the Synaspismos and KKE-Communist parties, as well as by various Professors who oppose the specific governmental law.
Revised: The strike of the students has been backed by the Greek General Confederation of Labour(GSEE), the Synaspismos and KKE-Communist parties, as well as by various Professors who oppose the specific governmental law.
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Original:  The students are opposing the - proposed by the Minister of Education Marietta Yannakou - law which has to do with the foundation of private universities in Greece as well as other aspects of the academic organization.
Revised:  Students are opposing the - proposed by the Minister of Education Marietta Yannakou - law which has to do with the foundation of private universities in Greece as well as other aspects of the academic organization.
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Original:  The students are opposing the - proposed by the Minister of Education Marietta Yannakou - law which has to do with the foundation of private universities in Greece as well as other aspects of the academic organization.
Revised:  The students are opposing the law— proposed by the Minister of Education Marietta Yannakou - law which has to do with the foundation of private universities in Greece as well as other aspects of the academic organization.
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Original:  The students are opposing the - proposed by the Minister of Education Marietta Yannakou - law which has to do with the foundation of private universities in Greece as well as other aspects of the academic organization.
Revised:  The students are opposing the - proposed by the Minister of Education Marietta Yannakou — which has to do with the foundation of private universities in Greece as well as other aspects of the academic organization.
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Original:  The authenticity of the information could not be independently confirmed   
Revised:  The authenticity of the information could not be independently confirmed . 
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Original: In the 43rd minute Peter Crouch had the sort of miss that was so spectacular it may make highlight reels.
Revised: On 43 minutes Peter Crouch had the sort of miss that was so spectacular it may make highlight reels.
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Original:  Unmarked in the centre of the goal , no defender in stick-swinging range, it might have been easier to get the ball on target than  skew the volley  wide.
Revised:  Unmarked in the centre of the goal it might have been easier to get the ball on target than skew the volley wide.
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Original:  Unmarked in the centre of the goal , no defender in stick-swinging range, it might have been easier to get the ball on target than  skew the volley  wide.
Revised:  Unmarked in the centre of the goal , no defender in stick-swinging range, it might have been easier to get the ball on target than to skew the volley wide.
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Original:  This time Crouch rose impressively above Brent Sancho and powered a header into the top left corner . Lampard  peppered Shaka Hislop's goal with shots in 74, 77, and 78 minutes but they did not trouble the West Ham keeper.
Revised:  This time Crouch rose impressively above Brent Sancho and powered a header into the top left corner . Lampard had peppered Shaka Hislop's goal with shots in 74, 77, and 78 minutes but they did not trouble the West Ham keeper.
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Original:  This time Crouch rose impressively above Brent Sancho and powered a header into the top left corner . Lampard  peppered Shaka Hislop's goal with shots in 74, 77, and 78 minutes but they did not trouble the West Ham keeper.
Revised:  This time Crouch rose impressively above Brent Sancho and powered a header into the top left corner . Lampard peppered Shaka Hislop's goal with shots in 74, 77, and 78 minutes - but none troubled the West Ham keeper.
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Original:  With what might have felt like a consolation goal for  a side that had all game struggled to find the killer instinct , in the 90th minute Steven Gerrardcut inside on the edge of the penalty area and fired into the top left corner.
Revised:  With what might have felt like a consolation goal for For a side that had all game struggled to find the killer instinct , in the 90th minute Steven Gerrardcut inside on the edge of the penalty area and fired into the top left corner.
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Original:   England's threat increased with Rooney in the centre, and with Lennon and later substitute Stuart Downing who both tested the Socca Warriors from wide positions.
Revised:  While England's threat increased with Rooney in the centre, and with Lennon and later substitute Stuart Downing who both tested the Socca Warriors from wide positions.
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Original: 180px| North Korea declares nukes The state-run Korean Central News Agency has released a statement from the North Korean Foreign Ministry cancelling the ongoing six-party talks aimed at ending North Korea's nuclear weapon development programs.
Revised:  North Korea declares nukes The state-run Korean Central News Agency has released a statement from the North Korean Foreign Ministry cancelling the ongoing six-party talks aimed at ending North Korea's nuclear weapon development programs.
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Original: 180px| North Korea declares nukes The state-run Korean Central News Agency has released a statement from the North Korean Foreign Ministry cancelling the ongoing six-party talks aimed at ending North Korea's nuclear weapon development programs.
Revised: 180px| North Korea declares itself a nuclear state. The state-run Korean Central News Agency has released a statement from the North Korean Foreign Ministry cancelling the ongoing six-party talks aimed at ending North Korea's nuclear weapon development programs.
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