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Original:  Governor-elect Chris Christie said that "I think we all see what’s happened in California," he added "It’s gotten completely out of control.
Revised:  Governor-elect Chris Christie said that "I think we all see what’s happened in California," he said. "It’s gotten completely out of control.
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Original:  The bill specifies that only cretin chronic diseases are eligible, ALS, AIDS, cancer, muscular dystrophy, and multiple sclerosis.
Revised:  The bill specifies that only certain chronic diseases are eligible, ALS, AIDS, cancer, muscular dystrophy, and multiple sclerosis.
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Original: Opponents of the bill point to California where they say that Cannabis is too loosely regulated.
Revised: Opponents of the bill point to California where they say that cannabis is too loosely regulated.
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Original:  Four people have been shot in all, two have been killed and two others have been injured  .
Revised:  Five people were shot in all, two have been killed and two others have been injured .
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Original:  According to a hospital spokesperson, all four were transported to WellStar Kennestone Hospital There have been no reports on the health conditions of the two wounded victims . "Investigators are speaking with everyone who would have been in side the business and had information," said Hernandez
Revised:  According to a hospital spokesperson, all four were transported to WellStar Kennestone Hospital . "Investigators are speaking with everyone who would have been in side the business and had information," said Hernandez
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Original:  Five people were shot in all, two have been killed and three others have been injured in critical condition.
Revised:  Five people were shot in all, three have been killed and three others have been injured in critical condition.
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Original:  Five people were shot in all, two have been killed and three others have been injured in critical condition.
Revised:  Five people were shot in all, two have been killed and two others have been injured in critical condition.
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Original:  In the absence of an immediate and feasible camp option, UNHCR is planning to set up a transit center in Amran as an interim and temporary solution," he concluded  
Revised:  In the absence of an immediate and feasible camp option, UNHCR is planning to set up a transit center in Amran as an interim and temporary solution," he concluded . 
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Original:  News24 reports that one camp at Al Mazrak in the Hajjah province is now home to 21,000 people, twice its capacity, and others were also being populated quickly and in dire conditions.
Revised:  News24 reports that one camp at Al Mazrak in the Hajjah province is now home to 21,000 people, double its intended capacity, and others were also being populated quickly and in dire conditions.
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Original: "I have [...] laid an order which will proscribe Al Muhajiroun , Islam4UK, and a number of the other names the organisation goes by," said the home secretary, Alan Johnson.
Revised: "I have [...] laid an order which will proscribe Al-Muhajiroun , Islam4UK, and a number of the other names the organisation goes by," said the home secretary, Alan Johnson.
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Original: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality , Conan O'Brien , announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's "The Tonight Show" if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot come to fruition.
Revised: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality Conan O'Brien , announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's "The Tonight Show" if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot come to fruition.
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Original: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality , Conan O'Brien , announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's "The Tonight Show" if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot come to fruition.
Revised: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality , Conan O'Brien announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's "The Tonight Show" if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot come to fruition.
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Original: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality , Conan O'Brien , announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's "The Tonight Show" if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot come to fruition.
Revised: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality , Conan O'Brien , announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's "The Tonight Show" if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot comes to fruition.
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Original:  This move, NBC has said, would be done to accommodate the  previous "Tonight Show" host, Jay Leno 's, return back to late-night from his current prime-time slot.
Revised:  This move, NBC has said, would be done to accommodate the return of the previous "Tonight Show" host, Jay Leno 's, return back to late-night from his current prime-time slot.
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Original:  This move, NBC has said, would be done to accommodate the  previous "Tonight Show" host, Jay Leno 's, return back to late-night from his current prime-time slot.
Revised:  This move, NBC has said, would be done to accommodate the previous "Tonight Show" host, Jay Leno , back to late-night from his current prime-time slot.
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Original: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality Conan O'Brien announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's " The Tonight Show " if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot comes to fruition.
Revised: On Tuesday, United States television personality Conan O'Brien announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's " The Tonight Show " if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot comes to fruition.
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Original: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality Conan O'Brien announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's " The Tonight Show " if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot comes to fruition.
Revised: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality Conan O'Brien announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's The Tonight Show " if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot comes to fruition.
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Original: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality Conan O'Brien announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's " The Tonight Show " if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot comes to fruition.
Revised: On Tuesday, U.S. television personality Conan O'Brien announced in a statement that he will no longer serve as the host for NBC's " The Tonight Show if the network's attempt to move his program to the post-midnight time slot comes to fruition.
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Original:  This move, NBC has said, would be done to accommodate the return of the previous "Tonight Show " host, Jay Leno, back to late-night from his current prime-time slot.
Revised:  This move, NBC has said, would be done to accommodate the return of the previous Tonight Show host, Jay Leno, back to late-night from his current prime-time slot.
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Original:  In a long statement to the media, O'Brien states that NBC has given him a "scant" seven months to establish himself as host of " The Tonight Show.
Revised:  In a long statement to the media, O'Brien states that NBC has given him a "scant" seven months to establish himself as host of The Tonight Show.
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Original:  " O'Brien adamantly declares that "delaying ' The Tonight Show ' into the next day to accommodate another comedy program will seriously damage what I consider to be the greatest franchise in the history of broadcasting."
Revised:  O'Brien adamantly declares that "delaying ' The Tonight Show ' into the next day to accommodate another comedy program will seriously damage what I consider to be the greatest franchise in the history of broadcasting."
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Original:  " O'Brien adamantly declares that "delaying ' The Tonight Show ' into the next day to accommodate another comedy program will seriously damage what I consider to be the greatest franchise in the history of broadcasting."
Revised:  " O'Brien adamantly declares that "delaying The Tonight Show ' into the next day to accommodate another comedy program will seriously damage what I consider to be the greatest franchise in the history of broadcasting."
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Original:  " O'Brien adamantly declares that "delaying ' The Tonight Show ' into the next day to accommodate another comedy program will seriously damage what I consider to be the greatest franchise in the history of broadcasting."
Revised:  " O'Brien adamantly declares that "delaying ' The Tonight Show into the next day to accommodate another comedy program will seriously damage what I consider to be the greatest franchise in the history of broadcasting."
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Original:  Citing his view that NBC's purposed switch of " The Tonight Show " time slot could lead to the show's ultimate "destruction," O'Brien maintains that he would have no other choice than to step down as host—which could also include his possible move to another cable network—if this does in fact happen
Revised:  Citing his view that NBC's purposed switch of The Tonight Show " time slot could lead to the show's ultimate "destruction," O'Brien maintains that he would have no other choice than to step down as host—which could also include his possible move to another cable network—if this does in fact happen
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Original:  Citing his view that NBC's purposed switch of " The Tonight Show " time slot could lead to the show's ultimate "destruction," O'Brien maintains that he would have no other choice than to step down as host—which could also include his possible move to another cable network—if this does in fact happen
Revised:  Citing his view that NBC's purposed switch of " The Tonight Show time slot could lead to the show's ultimate "destruction," O'Brien maintains that he would have no other choice than to step down as host—which could also include his possible move to another cable network—if this does in fact happen
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Original: " A destructive widespread tsunami threat does not exist based on historical earthquake and tsunami data," the US Pacific Tsunami Warning Center said.
Revised: " destructive widespread tsunami threat does not exist based on historical earthquake and tsunami data," the US Pacific Tsunami Warning Center said.
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Original: "  destructive widespread tsunami threat does not exist based on historical earthquake and tsunami data," the US Pacific Tsunami Warning Center said.
Revised: " A destructive widespread tsunami threat does not exist based on historical earthquake and tsunami data," the US Pacific Tsunami Warning Center said.
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Original:  The European Court of Human Rights deemed powers contained it the Terrorism Act 2000 denied the human right of privacy   
Revised:  The European Court of Human Rights deemed powers contained it the Terrorism Act 2000 denied the human right of privacy . 
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Original:  They can also make arrests if these are found   
Revised:  They can also make arrests if these are found . 
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Original:  Chief Constable Craig Mackey of the Association of Chief Police Officers said that while this appeal was pending Section 44 of the Act would continue to be used by police   
Revised:  Chief Constable Craig Mackey of the Association of Chief Police Officers said that while this appeal was pending Section 44 of the Act would continue to be used by police . 
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Original: An international court in Strasbourg has issued a ruling yesterday that powers allowing UK police to stop and search anyone without reason is in breach of European law.
Revised: An international court in Strasbourg issued a ruling yesterday that powers allowing UK police to stop and search anyone without reason is in breach of European law.
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Original: An international court in Strasbourg has issued a ruling yesterday that powers allowing UK police to stop and search anyone without reason is in breach of European law.
Revised: An international court in Strasbourg has issued a ruling yesterday that powers allowing UK police to stop and search anyone without reason are in breach of European law.
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Original: Teodoro García Simental , alleged to be a major kingpin in Mexico, has been arrested by Federal Police in southern Baja California . "No shots were fired.
Revised:  , alleged to be a major kingpin in Mexico, has been arrested by Federal Police in southern Baja California . "No shots were fired.
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Original: Teodoro García Simental , alleged to be a major kingpin in Mexico, has been arrested by Federal Police in southern Baja California . "No shots were fired.
Revised: Teodoro García Simental , alleged to be a major kingpin in Mexico, has been arrested by in southern . "No shots were fired.
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Original:  The United States Drug Enforcement Administration spokesperson Michael Sanders said the DEA assisted in the arrest.
Revised:  The United States spokesperson Michael Sanders said the DEA assisted in the arrest.
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Original:  According to The New York Times Simental used to be a top hitman for the Tijuana Arellano-Felix cartel before assuming control.
Revised:  According to The New York Times Simental used to be a top for the before assuming control.
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Original:  He is said to be particularly brutal, pinning cautionary notes to his victims or dissolving them in caustic soda .
Revised:  He is said to be particularly brutal, pinning cautionary notes to his victims or dissolving them in .
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Original:  It is estimated that 17,000 people have been killed in the last three years of the Mexican Drug War
Revised:  It is estimated that 17,000 people have been killed in the last three years of the 
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Original: The author of said statement, David Drummond, Google's Senior Vice President of Corporate Development and Chief Legal Officer  noted that Google was not the only multinational corporation targeted, "As part of our investigation we have discovered that at least twenty other large companies from a wide range of businesses--including the Internet, finance, technology, media and chemical sectors--have been similarly targeted."
Revised: The author of said statement, David Drummond, Google's Senior Vice President of Corporate Development and Chief Legal Officer , noted that Google was not the only multinational corporation targeted, "As part of our investigation we have discovered that at least twenty other large companies from a wide range of businesses--including the Internet, finance, technology, media and chemical sectors--have been similarly targeted."
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Original: The author of said statement, David Drummond, Google's Senior Vice President of Corporate Development and Chief Legal Officer  noted that Google was not the only multinational corporation targeted, "As part of our investigation we have discovered that at least twenty other large companies from a wide range of businesses--including the Internet, finance, technology, media and chemical sectors--have been similarly targeted."
Revised: The author of said statement, David Drummond, Google's Senior Vice President of Corporate Development and Chief Legal Officer noted that Google was not the only multinational corporation targeted, "As part of our investigation we have discovered that at least twenty other large companies from a wide range of businesses—including the Internet, finance, technology, media and chemical sectors--have been similarly targeted."
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Original: The author of said statement, David Drummond, Google's Senior Vice President of Corporate Development and Chief Legal Officer  noted that Google was not the only multinational corporation targeted, "As part of our investigation we have discovered that at least twenty other large companies from a wide range of businesses--including the Internet, finance, technology, media and chemical sectors--have been similarly targeted."
Revised: The author of said statement, David Drummond, Google's Senior Vice President of Corporate Development and Chief Legal Officer noted that Google was not the only multinational corporation targeted, "As part of our investigation we have discovered that at least twenty other large companies from a wide range of businesses--including the Internet, finance, technology, media and chemical sectors—have been similarly targeted."
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Original:  Nevertheless, Google has long been criticized this voluntary censorship of search results of topics, such as the Tiananmen Square protests of 1989, movements for Tibetan and Taiwan independence, and the Falun Gong religious movement along with other information considered harmful to the Chinese government.
Revised:  Nevertheless, Google has been still strongly criticized this voluntary censorship of search results of topics, such as the Tiananmen Square protests of 1989, movements for Tibetan and Taiwan independence, and the Falun Gong religious movement along with other information considered harmful to the Chinese government.
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Original: Nevertheless, Google has been still strongly criticized this voluntary censorship of search results of topics, such as the Tiananmen Square protests of 1989, movements for Tibetan and Taiwan independence, and the Falun Gong religious movement along with other information considered harmful to the Chinese government . Some feel it goes against and is hypocritical of Google's informal motto, "Don't be evil".
Revised: Nevertheless, Google has been still strongly criticized this voluntary censorship of search results of topics, such as the Tiananmen Square protests of 1989, movements for Tibetan and Taiwan independence, and the Falun Gong religious movement along with other information considered harmful to the Chinese government Some feel it goes against and is hypocritical of Google's informal motto, "Don't be evil".
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Original:  Analysts noted that the move may hurt Google, which has a somewhat limited share of the Internet search market in China which is dominated by the Chinese-based Google-like website Baidu.
Revised:  Analysts noted that this move has the potential to financially hurt Google, which has a somewhat limited share of the Internet search market in China which is dominated by the Chinese-based Google-like website Baidu.
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Original: Nevertheless, Google has been still strongly criticized this voluntary censorship of search results of topics, such as the Tiananmen Square protests of 1989, movements for Tibetan and Taiwan independence, and the Falun Gong religious movement along with other information considered harmful to the Chinese government Some feel it goes against and is hypocritical of Google's informal motto, "Don't be evil".
Revised: Nevertheless, Google has still been widely criticized for this voluntary censorship of search results of topics, such as the Tiananmen Square protests of 1989, movements for Tibetan and Taiwan independence, and the Falun Gong religious movement along with other information considered harmful to the Chinese government Some feel it goes against and is hypocritical of Google's informal motto, "Don't be evil".
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Original:  Analysts noted that this move has the potential to financially hurt Google, which has a somewhat limited share of the Internet search market in China  which is dominated by the Chinese-based Google-like website Baidu.
Revised:  Analysts noted that this move has the potential to financially hurt Google, which has a somewhat limited share of the Internet search market in China , which is dominated by the Chinese-based Google-like website Baidu.
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Original:  They get 8 to 10 percent of their revenues from China," said Trip Chowdhry, an analyst for Global Equities Research.
Revised:  They get eight to ten percent of their revenues from China," said Trip Chowdhry, an analyst for Global Equities Research.
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Original: Template:Breaking Image:Google China headquarter in Beijing.jpg|Google's Chinese headquarters in Beijing.
Revised:  Image:Google China headquarter in Beijing.jpg|Google's Chinese headquarters in Beijing.
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Original: Shabwah Governor Ali Hassan al-Ahmadi told journalists that security forces had entered  Mehdar house and killed him on site.
Revised: Shabwah Governor Ali Hassan al-Ahmadi told journalists that security forces had entered the Mehdar house and killed him on site.
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Original:  Abdullah Mehdar was added to Yemens "List of the most wanted" by the Yemeni Interior Ministry earlier today.
Revised:  Abdullah Mehdar was added to Yemen's "List of the most wanted" by the Yemeni Interior Ministry earlier today.
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Original:  Until President Museveni  spoke out, the bill was widely supported by the ruling majority party, the National Resistance Movement (NRM), and, as result, was expected to pass by a significant number of votes  .
Revised:  Until President Museveni publicly spoke out, the bill was widely supported by the ruling majority party, the National Resistance Movement (NRM), and, as result, was expected to pass by a significant number of votes .
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Original:  Until President Museveni  spoke out, the bill was widely supported by the ruling majority party, the National Resistance Movement (NRM), and, as result, was expected to pass by a significant number of votes  .
Revised:  Until President Museveni spoke out, the bill was widely supported by the ruling majority party, the National Resistance Movement (NRM), and, as result, was expected to easily pass with a significant number of votes .
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Original:  In a nation where homosexuality is already a criminal offense punishable by up to 14 years in jail, this bill would would raise that penalty to life in prison.
Revised:  In a nation where homosexuality is already a criminal offense punishable by up to fourteen years in jail, this bill would would raise that penalty to life in prison.
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Original:  Museveni stressed in this statement on Wednesday, that the Member of Parliament who proposed the legislation in question, although he is a member of the NRM, did so as an individual and was not behooved by any government official to propose it.
Revised:  Museveni stressed in this statement on Wednesday, that the Member of Parliament who proposed the legislation in question, although he is a member of the NRM, did so as an individual and was not behooved by any government official to draft it.
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Original:  In light of all that has occurred, the Museveni told his party that the issue  was no longer a parliamentary one, and that it would be solely discussed and handled accordingly by he and his cabinet alone
Revised:  In light of all that has occurred, Museveni told his party that the issue was no longer a parliamentary one, and that it would be solely discussed and handled accordingly by he and his cabinet alone
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Original:  In light of all that has occurred, the Museveni told his party that the issue  was no longer a parliamentary one, and that it would be solely discussed and handled accordingly by he and his cabinet alone
Revised:  In light of all that has occurred, the Museveni told his party that the issue was no longer a parliamentary one, and that it is to be solely discussed and handled accordingly by he and his cabinet alone
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Original: File:Yoweri Museveni.jpg|Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni (Circa 2003).
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