wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  President Chirac is also aligned with the UMP. Sarkozy's rivals trail far behind him, with  Michèle Alliot-Marie , the Defense Minister , gaining 5\%, Prime Minister Dominique de Villepin at 4\% and President Jacques Chirac with a token 1\%.
Revised:  President Chirac is also aligned with the UMP. Sarkozy's rivals trail far behind him, with Michèle Alliot-Marie at 5\%, Prime Minister Dominique de Villepin at 4\% and President Jacques Chirac with a token 1\%.
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Original:  President Chirac is also aligned with the UMP. Sarkozy's rivals trail far behind him, with  Michèle Alliot-Marie , the Defense Minister , gaining 5\%, Prime Minister Dominique de Villepin at 4\% and President Jacques Chirac with a token 1\%.
Revised:  President Chirac is also aligned with the UMP. Sarkozy's rivals trail far behind him, with Michèle Alliot-Marie , the Defense Minister , gaining 5\%, Prime Minister Dominique de Villepin at 4\% and President Jacques Chirac with 1\%.
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Original:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
Revised:  Sarkozy's support among the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
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Original:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
Revised:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
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Original:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
Revised:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie has 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
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Original:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
Revised:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin and Chirac have 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
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Original:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
Revised:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% each, and the remaining 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
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Original:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% of those polled did not express a preference.
Revised:  UMP supporters can be contrasted with the entire group polled , where Sarkozy had only 34\% support . Alliot-Marie drops one point to 4\%, de Villepin also dropping a point to draw level with Chirac at 3\% . 43\% did not express a preference.
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Original: Nicholas Sarkozy—favorite of the right On Tuesday, BVA published a telephone poll conducted for French magazine Le Figaro and news channel LCI to gauge support for right-wing presidential candidates.
Revised: Nicholas Sarkozy—favorite of the right On Tuesday, BVA published a telephone poll conducted for French magazine and news channel LCI to gauge support for right-wing presidential candidates.
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Original: Nicholas Sarkozy—favorite of the right On Tuesday, BVA published a telephone poll conducted for French magazine Le Figaro and news channel LCI to gauge support for right-wing presidential candidates.
Revised: Nicholas Sarkozy—favorite of the right On Tuesday, BVA published a telephone poll conducted for French magazine Le Figaro and news channel to gauge support for right-wing presidential candidates.
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Original:  73\% of Union pour un Mouvement Populaire (Union for a Popular Movement or UMP) party supporters identified Interior Minister Nicolas Sarkozy as their preferred candidate for May's presidential election.
Revised:  73\% of (Union for a Popular Movement or UMP) party supporters identified Interior Minister Nicolas Sarkozy as their preferred candidate for May's presidential election.
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Original:  73\% of Union pour un Mouvement Populaire (Union for a Popular Movement or UMP) party supporters identified Interior Minister Nicolas Sarkozy as their preferred candidate for May's presidential election.
Revised:  73\% of Union pour un Mouvement Populaire (Union for a Popular Movement or UMP) party supporters identified Interior Minister as their preferred candidate for May's presidential election.
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Original:  73\% of Union pour un Mouvement Populaire (Union for a Popular Movement or UMP) party supporters identified Interior Minister Nicolas Sarkozy as their preferred candidate for May's presidential election.
Revised:  73\% of Union pour un Mouvement Populaire (Union for a Popular Movement or UMP) party supporters identified Interior Minister Nicolas Sarkozy as their preferred candidate for May's election.
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Original:  Related news Socialist Ségolène Royal launches campaign for French presidency, November 18, 200
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Original:  It is intended that this stadium will be used for the  Rugby World Cup 2011
Revised:  It is intended that this stadium will be used for the 2011 Rugby World Cup 2011
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Original:  It is intended that this stadium will be used for the  Rugby World Cup 2011
Revised:  It is intended that this stadium will be used for the Rugby World Cup 
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Original:   It is now falls on the Auckland Regional Council to approve the stadium plans or propose something else  . Based on both these decisions, the New Zealand government will then make a decision on whether to construct a new stadium or upgrade an old one and which site will be chosen.
Revised:  It is now falls on the Auckland Regional Council to approve the stadium plans or propose something else . Based on both these decisions, the central government will then make a decision on whether to construct a new stadium or upgrade an old one and which site will be chosen.
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Original:   It is now falls on the Auckland Regional Council to approve the stadium plans or propose something else, which is likely to happen tomorrow, Friday.
Revised:  It is now falls on the Auckland Regional Council to approve the stadium plans or propose something else, which is supposed to happen tomorrow, Friday.
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Original:  Based on both these decisions, the central government will then make a decision on whether to construct a new stadium or upgrade an old one and which site will  be chosen.
Revised:  Based on both these decisions, the central government will then make a decision on whether to construct a new stadium or upgrade an old one and which site will also be chosen.
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Original: The  Auckland City Council in New Zealand has approved the proposed NZ$700 million+ waterfront stadium in 12-8 (yes-no) vote in a marathon session lasting nearly 5 hours on Thursday night instead of an upgrade of Eden Park costing around $400 million.
Revised: The proposed new stadium on Auckland's waterfront.The Auckland City Council in New Zealand has approved the proposed NZ$700 million+ waterfront stadium in 12-8 (yes-no) vote in a marathon session lasting nearly 5 hours on Thursday night instead of an upgrade of Eden Park costing around $400 million.
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Original:  Forum 18 have been documentating the alleged Human rights abuse regarding the Hare Krishna village for some time, but as of 21st November events took a drastic turn.
Revised:  Forum 18 have been documenting the alleged Human rights abuse regarding the Hare Krishna village for some time, but as of 21st November events took a drastic turn.
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Original:  Forum 18 have been documenting the alleged Human rights abuse regarding the Hare Krishna village for some time, but as of 21st November events took a drastic turn.
Revised:  Forum 18 has been documenting the alleged Human rights abuse regarding the Hare Krishna village for some time, but as of 21st November events took a drastic turn.
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Original: Flag of Kazakhstan An on-going struggle in Kazakhstan between the authorities and a local Hindu village has turned serious.
Revised: Flag of Kazakhstan An ongoing struggle in Kazakhstan between the authorities and a local Hindu village has turned serious.
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Original:  Forum 18 has been documenting the alleged Human rights abuse regarding the Hare Krishna village for some time, but as of 21st November events took a drastic turn.
Revised:  Forum 18 has been documenting the alleged human rights abuse regarding the Hare Krishna village for some time, but as of 21st November events took a drastic turn.
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Original:  The following was seen and written by Ninel Fokina, president of the Almaty Helsinki Committee  and Andrei Grishin, official member of the International Bureau of Human Rights and Law Observance:
Revised:  The following was seen and written by Ninel Fokina, president of the Almaty Helsinki Committee , and Andrei Grishin, official member of the International Bureau of Human Rights and Law Observance:
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Original:  It should be noted that the acting Kazakh law does not stipulate such a kind of eviction as the demolition of houses, and the eviction should be accompanied by the inventory of property removed from the evacuated building, while the storage of this property should be provided is necessary  
Revised:  It should be noted that the acting Kazakh law does not stipulate such a kind of eviction as the demolition of houses, and the eviction should be accompanied by the inventory of property removed from the evacuated building, while the storage of this property should be provided is necessary . 
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Original:  It should be noted that the acting Kazakh law does not stipulate such a kind of eviction as the demolition of houses, and the eviction should be accompanied by the inventory of property removed from the evacuated building, while the storage of this property should be provided is necessary .
Revised:  It should be noted that the acting Kazakh law does not stipulate such a kind of eviction as the demolition of houses, and the eviction should be accompanied by the inventory of property removed from the evacuated building, while the storage of this property should be provided is necessary 
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Original:  He married the actress :w: Monique Chaumette in 1962;
Revised:  He married the actress Monique Chaumette in 1962;
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Original:  He was born in Lille, northern France, on 1 October  1930.
Revised:  He was born in Lille, northern France, on 1 October , 1930.
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Original: November 24, 2006 Former major league baseball pitcher Pat Dobson passed away from leukemia at the age of 64.
Revised:  Former major league baseball pitcher Pat Dobson passed away from leukemia at the age of 64.
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Original:  He passed away Wednesday night at a local San Diego hospital and only a day after being diagnosed with the disease.
Revised:  He passed away Wednesday night at a local San Diego hospital only a day after being diagnosed with the disease.
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Original:  He was a major league  All-Star in 1972.
Revised:  He was a major league w: All-Star in 1972.
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Original:  Dobson finished his 11 year career with a career win-loss record of 122-129  with a 3.54 ERA in eleven seasons.
Revised:  Dobson finished his 11 year career with a career win-loss record of 122-129 and with a 3.54 ERA in eleven seasons.
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Original:  The stadium consultation is because to host the Rugby World Cup, which New Zealand is hosting in 2011, the final venue has to be able to seat  60,000 people.
Revised:  The stadium consultation is because to host the Rugby World Cup, which New Zealand is hosting in 2011, the final venue has to be able to seat at least 60,000 people.
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Original:   The ARC found the waterfront stadium  "inappropriate" because there would be a significant adverse reaction to the council owned Ports of Auckland, special legislation would be required to build it, it would have a negati   
Revised:  The ARC found the waterfront stadium "inappropriate" because there would be a significant adverse reaction to the council owned Ports of Auckland, special legislation would be required to build it, it would have a negati Related new
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Original: According to a report released by the Turkish Economic and Social Studies Organization (TESEV) * for United Nation's Development Plan, the per capita GNP in Eastern Turkey, an area predominantly inhabited by Kurdish people, is as low as seven percent of that of the European Union on average.
Revised: According to a report released by the Turkish Economic and Social Studies Organization (TESEV) for United Nation's Development Plan, the per capita GNP in Eastern Turkey, an area predominantly inhabited by Kurdish people, is as low as seven percent of that of the European Union on average.
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Original:  If theis situation persists, people may start to migrate to Northern Iraq.
Revised:  If this situation persists, people may start to migrate to Northern Iraq.
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Original: According to a report released by the Turkish Economic and Social Studies Organization (TESEV) for United Nation's Development Plan, the per capita GNP in Eastern Turkey, an area predominantly inhabited by Kurdish people, is as low as seven percent of that of the European Union on average.
Revised: According to a report released by the Turkish Economic and Social Studies Foundation (TESEV) for United Nation's Development Plan, the per capita GNP in Eastern Turkey, an area predominantly inhabited by Kurdish people, is as low as seven percent of that of the European Union on average.
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Original:  Ubuntu was later distributed to the reception's attendees  
Revised:  Ubuntu was later distributed to the reception's attendees . 
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Original:  The Foreign Office asked Moscow for a response to the accusation of Russian involvement and President Putin himself dismissed the allegations saying (before the cause of death had been established) that there was no proof of an unnatural death and that the case was being used as a "political provocation"  
Revised:  The Foreign Office asked Moscow for a response to the accusation of Russian involvement and President Putin himself dismissed the allegations saying (before the cause of death had been established) that there was no proof of an unnatural death and that the case was being used as a "political provocation" . 
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Original:  The Foreign Office asked Moscow for a response to the accusation of Russian involvement and President Putin himself dismissed the allegations saying (before the cause of death had been established) that there was no proof of an unnatural death and that the case was being used as a "political provocation"  
Revised:  The Foreign Office asked Moscow for a response to the accusation of Russian involvement and President Putin himself dismissed the allegations saying (before the cause of death had been established) that there was no proof of an unnatural death and that the case was being used as a "political provocation" Related new
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Original:  It is reported that he had met two Russians in an hotel room, one said to be former member of the KGB in conneciton with the affair and he went on to meet Mario Scaramella at a sushi bar in Piccadilly where some papers were exchanged.
Revised:  It is reported that he had met two Russians in an hotel room, one said to be former member of the KGB in connection with the affair and he went on to meet Mario Scaramella at a sushi bar in Piccadilly where some papers were exchanged.
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Original: Yesterday, the British Cabinet decided , at its first meeting on the subject, that Britain will retain its nuclear deterrent by replacing the Trident missile system carried on submarines  .
Revised: The British Cabinet decided , at its first meeting on the subject, that Britain will retain its nuclear deterrent by replacing the Trident missile system carried on submarines .
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Original: Yesterday, the British Cabinet decided , at its first meeting on the subject, that Britain will retain its nuclear deterrent by replacing the Trident missile system carried on submarines  .
Revised: Yesterday, the British Cabinet decided that Britain will retain its nuclear deterrent by replacing the Trident missile system carried on submarines .
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Original:  The case for considering land-based and airborne systems , put by Geoff Hoon, former Defence Minister  was rejected.
Revised:  The case for considering land-based and airborne systems made by former Defence Minister was rejected.
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Original:   Cabinet agreed that three or four new submarines should be built to carry the new missiles, but the number of nuclear warheads to be carried by each vessel will be decided at a later date.
Revised:  The Cabinet agreed that three or four new submarines should be built to carry the new missiles, but the number of nuclear warheads to be carried by each vessel will be decided at a later date.
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Original:  The time for design and construction is said to be 17 years and so there is a the need for an early decision.
Revised:  The time for design and construction is expected to be 17 years and so there is a the need for an early decision.
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Original:   Gordon Brown is reported as being keen to get construction started as soon as possible in order to retain the skills of the existing workforce.
Revised:  Chancellor Gordon Brown is reported as being keen to get construction started as soon as possible in order to retain the skills of the existing workforce.
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Original:  It was agreed that a White Paper putting  the alternatives would be published before Christmas and that then there would be a period of consultation  . Parliament would be asked to vote on the Cabinet’s proposal, not to choose between alternative systems but to support the Cabinet’s choice ‘in principle’.
Revised:  It was agreed that a White Paper putting up the alternatives would be published before Christmas and that then there would be a period of consultation . Parliament would be asked to vote on the Cabinet’s proposal, not to choose between alternative systems but to support the Cabinet’s choice ‘in principle’.
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Original:  It was agreed that a White Paper putting  the alternatives would be published before Christmas and that then there would be a period of consultation  . Parliament would be asked to vote on the Cabinet’s proposal, not to choose between alternative systems but to support the Cabinet’s choice ‘in principle’.
Revised:  It was agreed that a White Paper putting the alternatives would be published before Christmas and a a period of consultation . Parliament would be asked to vote on the Cabinet’s proposal, not to choose between alternative systems but to support the Cabinet’s choice ‘in principle’.
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Original:  It was agreed that a White Paper putting  the alternatives would be published before Christmas and that then there would be a period of consultation  . Parliament would be asked to vote on the Cabinet’s proposal, not to choose between alternative systems but to support the Cabinet’s choice ‘in principle’.
Revised:  It was agreed that a White Paper putting the alternatives would be published before Christmas and that then there would be a period of consultation would follow . Parliament would be asked to vote on the Cabinet’s proposal, not to choose between alternative systems but to support the Cabinet’s choice ‘in principle’.
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Original: Britain currently deploys 4 Vanguard class submarines, each armed with 16 Trident II D-5 missiles carrying  12 nuclear warheads apiece.
Revised: Britain currently deploys 4 Vanguard class submarines, each armed with 16 Trident II D-5 missiles carrying upto 12 nuclear warheads apiece.
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Original:  The existing fleet of four Vanguard class submarines, even if refitted, is due for decommissioning by 2024 at the very latest.
Revised:  The existing fleet of four Vanguard class submarines, even if refitted, is due for decommissioning by 2024 at the latest.
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Original:  The time for design and construction is expected to be 17 years and so there is a the need for an early decision.
Revised:  The time for design and construction is expected to be 17 years , so there is a the need for an early decision.
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Original:  The time for design and construction is expected to be 17 years and so there is a the need for an early decision.
Revised:  The time for design and construction is expected to be 17 years and so there is a need for an early decision.
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Original:  Chancellor Gordon Brown is reported as being keen to get construction started as soon as possible  in order to retain the skills of the existing workforce.
Revised:  Chancellor Gordon Brown is reported as being keen to get construction started as soon as possible , in order to retain the skills of the existing workforce.
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Original:  Those Cabinet Ministers thought to oppose the replacement of Trident, who worried that there might be a breach of Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty or who had concern that the Labour party had not been consulted sufficiently , including Margaret Beckett and Peter Hain, until recently a member of CND , expressed themselves content in the light of the proposal to carry out consultation and have a debate in Parliament in February.
Revised:  Some Cabinet Ministers thought to oppose the replacement of Trident, who worried that there might be a breach of Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty or who had concern that the Labour party had not been consulted sufficiently , including Margaret Beckett and Peter Hain, until recently a member of CND , expressed themselves content in the light of the proposal to carry out consultation and have a debate in Parliament in February.
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