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Original:  The vehicle had been converted with compartments for hiding people in, so that news agencies are describing the modified vehicle as both a truck and a bus  
Revised:  The vehicle had been converted with compartments for hiding people in, so that news agencies are describing the modified vehicle as both a truck and a bus . 
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Original:  23 passengers were injured and are reported to be hospitalised and in good condition  
Revised:  23 passengers were injured and are reported to be hospitalised and in good condition . 
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Original: The Dow Jones index was one that fared particularly poorly today, as not one of it's companies increased it's share price.
Revised: The Dow Jones index was one that fared particularly poorly today, as not one of its companies increased its share price.
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Original: Stock markets around the world , particularly those in the United States and the United Kingdom, have fallen dramatically today.
Revised: Stock markets around the world have fallen dramatically today.
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Revised:  This debate that I am watching on TV is so old. There were many more jobs when it came out. I bet it was seen on American-made TVs. I want to George your bill
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Original:  One of the worst faring indexes of the day was the Brazilian  Bovespa index.
Revised:  One of the worst faring indexes of the day was the Brazilian Potato Bovespa index.
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Original:  One of the worst faring indexes of the day was the Brazilian Potato Bovespa index.
Revised:  One of the worst faring indexes of the day was the Brazilian Bovespa index.
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Original: The report named the Red List of Threatened Species  is published by IUCN every year.
Revised: The report , Red List of Threatened Species is published by IUCN every year.
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Original: The report named the Red List of Threatened Species  is published by IUCN every year.
Revised: The report named the Red List of Threatened Species , is published by IUCN every year.
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Original:  "We will expand the scope further to include a far broader range of groups, thus informing and assisting policy-makers in a hugely more objective and representative manner.  
Revised:  "We will expand the scope further to include a far broader range of groups, thus informing and assisting policy-makers in a hugely more objective and representative manner. " 
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Original: Image:Bufo periglenes1.jpg | thumb | left | Holdridge's Toad from Costa Rica, not been seen since 1986, is declared extinct.
Revised: Image:Bufo periglenes1.jpg | thumb | left | Holdridge's Toad from Costa Rica, not seen since 1986, is declared extinct.
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Original: ]] The key findings of the report was announced today at the World Conservation Congress being held in Barcelona, Spain.
Revised: ]] The key findings of the report were announced today at the World Conservation Congress being held in Barcelona, Spain.
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Original:  The congress, held every four years, will deliberate over the next 10 days action required to slow the rate of species extinction.
Revised:  The congress, held every four years, will deliberate over the next 10 days actions required to slow the rate of species extinction.
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Original:  Today was the first day Obama received 50\% or more  in the Day to Day Politics Poll Average since it began back in mid July.
Revised:  Today was the first day Obama received 50\% or more support in the Day to Day Politics Poll Average since it began back in mid July.
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Original:  Barack Obama now has  6.8\% lead over John McCain with a margin of error of 0.75\%.
Revised:  Barack Obama now has a 6.8\% lead over John McCain with a margin of error of 0.75\%.
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Original:  The last time time it was this near this high was September 1, 2008 when it was 6.0\%  . For the past 10 days, the Gallup Poll and the Rasmussen three day tracking polls have held a lead for Obama.
Revised:  The last time Obama's lead was near this high was September 1, 2008 when it was 6.0\% . For the past 10 days, the Gallup Poll and the Rasmussen three day tracking polls have held a lead for Obama.
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Original:  For the past 10 days, the Gallup Poll and the Rasmussen three day tracking polls have held a lead for Obama.
Revised:  For the past 10 days, the Gallup and Rasmussen three day tracking polls have held a lead for Obama.
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Original: |120px|Barack Obama120px|John McCain United States presidential candidate Barack Obama is now at 50\%  in the polls.
Revised: |120px|Barack Obama120px|John McCain United States presidential candidate Barack Obama now has 50\% in the polls.
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Original: |120px|Barack Obama120px|John McCain United States presidential candidate Barack Obama is now at 50\%  in the polls.
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Original:  Yesterday was the first day Obama received 50\% or more support in the Day to Day Politics Poll Average since it began back in mid July.
Revised:  Tuesday was the first day Obama received 50\% or more support in the Day to Day Politics Poll Average since it began back in mid July.
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Original:  However, since the the middle of September, Barack Obama's polls have risen and he has recaptured the lead.
Revised:  However, since the middle of September, Barack Obama's polls have risen and he has recaptured the lead.
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Original:  has been hit by the global financial crisis , and reports from the UK suggest that the traders and city are preparing for the parent company to be declared insolvent, leaving customers to recover their monies through a financial compensation scheme being backed by the Icelandic Government , which will cover the first € 20,887 (Approx £16,300 / $28,720), the remainder of the customers funds being recovered through the UK's own financial compensation system.
Revised:  has been hit by the global financial crisis . Reports from the United Kingdom suggest that the traders and city are preparing for the parent company to be declared insolvent, leaving customers to recover their monies through a financial compensation scheme being backed by the Icelandic Government , which will cover the first € 20,887 (Approx £16,300 / $28,720), the remainder of the customers funds being recovered through the UK's own financial compensation system.
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Original:  has been hit by the global financial crisis , and reports from the UK suggest that the traders and city are preparing for the parent company to be declared insolvent, leaving customers to recover their monies through a financial compensation scheme being backed by the Icelandic Government , which will cover the first € 20,887 (Approx £16,300 / $28,720), the remainder of the customers funds being recovered through the UK's own financial compensation system.
Revised:  has been hit by the global financial crisis , and reports from the UK suggest that the traders and city are preparing for the parent company to be declared insolvent, leaving customers to recover their monies through a financial compensation scheme being backed by the Icelandic Government . The plan will cover the first € 20,887 (Approx £16,300 / $28,720), the remainder of the customers funds being recovered through the UK's own financial compensation system.
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Original:  has been hit by the global financial crisis , and reports from the UK suggest that the traders and city are preparing for the parent company to be declared insolvent, leaving customers to recover their monies through a financial compensation scheme being backed by the Icelandic Government , which will cover the first € 20,887 (Approx £16,300 / $28,720), the remainder of the customers funds being recovered through the UK's own financial compensation system.
Revised:  has been hit by the global financial crisis , and reports from the UK suggest that the traders and city are preparing for the parent company to be declared insolvent, leaving customers to recover their monies through a financial compensation scheme being backed by the Icelandic Government , which will cover the first Euro; 20,887 (Approx £16,300 / $28,720), the remainder of the customers funds being recovered through the UK's own financial compensation system.
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Original:  In response to the deepening world financial situation, the Dutch government has this afternoon increased its savers protection from € 38,000 to € 80,000 effective immediately, to help secure the financial status of its savers within Holland.
Revised:  In response to the deepening world financial situation, the Dutch government has this afternoon increased its savers protection from Euro; 38,000 to € 80,000 effective immediately, to help secure the financial status of its savers within Holland.
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Original:  In response to the deepening world financial situation, the Dutch government has this afternoon increased its savers protection from € 38,000 to € 80,000 effective immediately, to help secure the financial status of its savers within Holland.
Revised:  In response to the deepening world financial situation, the Dutch government has this afternoon increased its savers protection from € 38,000 to Euro; 80,000 effective immediately, to help secure the financial status of its savers within Holland.
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Original:  The plan will cover the first Euro;
Revised:  The plan will cover the first €
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Original:  In response to the deepening world financial situation, the Dutch government has this afternoon increased its savers protection from Euro;
Revised:  In response to the deepening world financial situation, the Dutch government has this afternoon increased its savers protection from €
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Original:  38,000 to Euro;
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Original:  We hope to provide you with more information shortly ." In response to the deepening world financial situation, the  Dutch government has this afternoon increased its savers protection from €38,000 to €80,000 effective immediately, to help secure the financial status of its savers within Holland.
Revised:  We hope to provide you with a blumpkin ." In response to the deepening world financial situation, the Dutch government has this afternoon increased its savers protection from €38,000 to €80,000 effective immediately, to help secure the financial status of its savers within Holland.
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Original:  Icesave also has a Dutch branch, icesave.nl - their website was unreachable at the time of this article  
Revised:  Icesave also has a Dutch branch, icesave.nl - their website was unreachable at the time of this article . 
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Original:  Icesave also has a Dutch branch, icesave.nl - their website was unreachable at the time of this article .
Revised:  Icesave also has a Dutch branch, icesave.nl - their website was unreachable at the time of this article 
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Original:  A thief in Bristol, United Kingdom, has been prosecuted due to incriminating evidence in the form of a tattoo an his neck with his name and date of birth that was captured by police CCTV, when he was in the process of stealing a Satellite navigation system in a car planted by police to find criminals   
Revised:  A thief in Bristol, United Kingdom, has been prosecuted due to incriminating evidence in the form of a tattoo an his neck with his name and date of birth that was captured by police CCTV, when he was in the process of stealing a Satellite navigation system in a car planted by police to find criminals . 
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Original:  A thief in Bristol, United Kingdom, has been prosecuted due to incriminating evidence in the form of a tattoo an his neck with his name and date of birth that was captured by police CCTV, when he was in the process of stealing a Satellite navigation system in a car planted by police to find criminals.
Revised:  A thief in Bristol, United Kingdom, has been prosecuted due to incriminating evidence in the form of a tattoo on his neck with his name and date of birth that was captured by police CCTV, when he was in the process of stealing a Satellite navigation system in a car planted by police to find criminals.
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Original: Shinzo Abe said he was motivated to help keep international peace — by protecting other nations  troops, which was beyond the scope allowed by the current constitution.
Revised: Shinzo Abe said he was motivated to help keep international peace — by protecting other nations ' troops, which was beyond the scope allowed by the current constitution.
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Original:  He interpreted it as a country  right, commenting, "it's about whether we can exercise this right that every country has".
Revised:  He interpreted it as a country 's right, commenting, "it's about whether we can exercise this right that every country has".
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Original: Shinzo Abe said he was motivated to help keep international peace — by protecting other nations' troops, which was beyond the scope allowed by the current constitution.
Revised: Shinzo Abe said he was motivated to help keep international peace — by protecting other nations' troops, which was beyond the scope currently allowed under the constitution.
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Original:  Yousuke Isozaki, an adviser to Mr Abe on security policy, noted that the report would urge Japan to strengthen ties with allies, the US in particular.
Revised:  Yousuke Isozaki, an adviser to Mr Abe on security policy, noted the report would urge Japan to strengthen ties with allies, the US in particular.
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Original:  The , the official news agency of the North Korean government, commented in an , saying that Abe was trying to conjure up fears of North Korea using missiles or nuclear weapons to help justify expanding Japan's military.
Revised:  The , the official news agency of the North Korean government, commented in an , saying Abe was trying to conjure up fears of North Korea using missiles or nuclear weapons to help justify expanding Japan's military.
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Original:  A Japan government panel met last Tuesday and drafted a report aimed to urge Japan to loosen restrictions on participation in military combat — restriction of military to self-defense — imposed in its since the end of World War II.
Revised:  A Japan government panel met last Tuesday and is drafting a report aimed to urge Japan to loosen restrictions on participation in military combat — restriction of military to self-defense — imposed in its since the end of World War II.
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Original:  Yousuke Isozaki, an adviser to Mr Abe on security policy, noted the report would urge Japan to strengthen ties with allies, the US in particular.
Revised:  Yousuke Isozaki, a security policy adviser to Mr Abe on security policy, noted the report would urge Japan to strengthen ties with allies, the US in particular.
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Original:  Yousuke Isozaki, an adviser to Mr Abe on security policy, noted the report would urge Japan to strengthen ties with allies, the US in particular.
Revised:  Yousuke Isozaki, an adviser to Mr Abe , said a revised military policy would strengthen Japan's ties with allies, the US in particular.
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Original:  This is following the ongoing events in the financial world, including the US Government's $700 billion bail out of the financial sector.
Revised:  This is following the ongoing events in the financial world, including the US Government's 
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Original: Stock markets around the world have continued to fall dramatically today.
Revised: Stock markets around the world continued to fall dramatically today.
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Original:  The lawyer Heffermehl and several colleagues claim that the Nobel committee of the Norwegian Parliament (Stortinget)have  in effect broken Norwegian and Swedish law by disrespecting the will and intentions of Alfred Nobel.
Revised:  The lawyer Heffermehl and several colleagues claim that the Nobel committee of the Norwegian Parliament (Stortinget)have in effect broken Norwegian and Swedish law by 
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Original:  The relevant portion will of Alfred Nobel states that  what has later become known as the Nobel Peace Prize should be awarded "  to the person who shall have done the most or the best work for fraternity between nations, for the abolition or reduction of standing armies and for the holding and promotion of peace congresses."
Revised:  failing to follow the intentions of Nobel states that what has later become known as the Nobel Peace Prize should be awarded " to the person who shall have done the most or the best work for fraternity between nations, for the abolition or reduction of standing armies and for the holding and promotion of peace congresses."
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Original:  The relevant portion will of Alfred Nobel states that  what has later become known as the Nobel Peace Prize should be awarded "  to the person who shall have done the most or the best work for fraternity between nations, for the abolition or reduction of standing armies and for the holding and promotion of peace congresses."
Revised:  The relevant portion will of Alfred Nobel states that what has later become known as the Nobel Peace Prize is : " to the person who shall have done the most or the best work for fraternity between nations, for the abolition or reduction of standing armies and for the holding and promotion of peace congresses."
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Original:    According to Heffermehl, until the Second World War about 85\% of the laureates were awarded in keeping with the will, but  only 45\% of the laureates after the second world war received it for work that fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
Revised:  English translation According to Heffermehl, until the Second World War about 85\% of the laureates were awarded in keeping with the will, but only 45\% of the laureates after the second world war received it for work that fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
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Original:    According to Heffermehl, until the Second World War about 85\% of the laureates were awarded in keeping with the will, but  only 45\% of the laureates after the second world war received it for work that fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
Revised:  According to Heffermehl, prior to World War II about 85\% of the laureates were awarded in keeping with the will, but only 45\% of the laureates after the second world war received it for work that fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
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Original:    According to Heffermehl, until the Second World War about 85\% of the laureates were awarded in keeping with the will, but  only 45\% of the laureates after the second world war received it for work that fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
Revised:  According to Heffermehl, until the Second World War about 85\% of recipients were awarded in keeping with the will, but only 45\% of the laureates after the second world war received it for work that fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
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Original:    According to Heffermehl, until the Second World War about 85\% of the laureates were awarded in keeping with the will, but  only 45\% of the laureates after the second world war received it for work that fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
Revised:  According to Heffermehl, until the Second World War about 85\% of the laureates were awarded in accordance with the will, but only 45\% of the laureates after the second world war received it for work that fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
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Original:    According to Heffermehl, until the Second World War about 85\% of the laureates were awarded in keeping with the will, but  only 45\% of the laureates after the second world war received it for work that fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
Revised:  According to Heffermehl, until the Second World War about 85\% of the laureates were awarded in keeping with the will, but only 45\% of the recipients fit the criteria of the will of Alfred Nobel.
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Original: The book asserts the Stortinget (Norwegian Parliament), which selects the five members of the committee which selects the recipients of the Peace Prize, has in effect broken Norwegian and Swedish law by failing to follow the intentions of Nobel's will.
Revised: The book asserts the Stortinget (Norwegian Parliament), which selects the five members of the committee which decide on the recipients of the Peace Prize, has in effect broken Norwegian and Swedish law by failing to follow the intentions of Nobel's will.
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Original:  The will was finalised in 1895, one year prior to his death .
Revised:  One year prior to his death .
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Original: Heffermehl denies having any plans for political or legal action: In Aftenposten he is quoted as saying to the Newsbureau NTB : "I have no idea what Lundestad is thinking of.
Revised: Heffermehl denies having any plans for political or legal action: In Aftenposten he is quoted as saying to the newsagency NTB : "I have no idea what Lundestad is thinking of.
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Original:  Of particular note was the failure of the committee to award a peace prize to Mahatma Ghandi , but the committee tacitly admitted this error when in 1948, the year of Ghandi's death, they elected to not award the Peace Prize saying "there was no suitable living candidate."
Revised:  Of particular note has been that Mahatma Ghandi, never received the prize , but the committee tacitly admitted this error when in 1948, the year of Ghandi's death, they elected to not award the Peace Prize saying "there was no suitable living candidate."
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Original: Released just three days before the announcement for Nobel's Peace Prize, on December 10, Norwegian lawyer and activist Fredrik Heffermehl's  book Nobels vilje (Nobel's Will)  is a critical assessment of the prize's history and the political committee and process which now awards the prize.
Revised: Just three days before the announcement for Nobel's Peace Prize, on December 10, Norwegian lawyer and activist Fredrik Heffermehl's book Nobels vilje (Nobel's Will) is a critical assessment of the prize's history and the political committee and process which now awards the prize.
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Original: Released just three days before the announcement for Nobel's Peace Prize, on December 10, Norwegian lawyer and activist Fredrik Heffermehl's  book Nobels vilje (Nobel's Will)  is a critical assessment of the prize's history and the political committee and process which now awards the prize.
Revised: Released just three days before the announcement for Nobel's Peace Prize, Norwegian lawyer and activist Fredrik Heffermehl's book Nobels vilje (Nobel's Will) is a critical assessment of the prize's history and the political committee and process which now awards the prize.
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Original: Released just three days before the announcement for Nobel's Peace Prize, on December 10, Norwegian lawyer and activist Fredrik Heffermehl's  book Nobels vilje (Nobel's Will)  is a critical assessment of the prize's history and the political committee and process which now awards the prize.
Revised: Released just three days before the announcement for Nobel's Peace Prize, on December 10, Norwegian lawyer and activist Fredrik Heffermehl's book Nobels vilje (Nobel's Will) . The book is a critical assessment of the prize's history and the political committee and process which now awards the prize.
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