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Original: A 16 year old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the 16 year old had stabbed his 18 year old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
Revised: A sixteen-year-old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the 16 year old had stabbed his 18 year old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
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Original: A 16 year old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the 16 year old had stabbed his 18 year old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
Revised: A 16 year old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the sixteen-year-old had stabbed his 18 year old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
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Original: A 16 year old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the 16 year old had stabbed his 18 year old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
Revised: A 16 year old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the 16 year old had stabbed his eighteen-year-old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
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Original:  The boy’s birth mother had abandoned them 10 years ago and had been adopted by a Belgian women .
Revised:  The boy’s birth mother had abandoned them ten years ago and had been adopted by a Belgian women .
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Original:  The boy’s birth mother had abandoned them 10 years ago and had been adopted by a Belgian women .
Revised:  The boy’s birth mother had abandoned them 10 years ago and had been adopted by a Belgian woman .
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Original:  At the time of the attack, the woman was visiting her home country
Revised:  At the time of the attack, she was visiting her home country
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Original: The brothers got in a fight over the use of a Playstation 3 A sixteen-year-old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the sixteen-year-old had stabbed his eighteen-year-old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
Revised: The brothers got in a fight over the use of a PlayStation 3 A sixteen-year-old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the sixteen-year-old had stabbed his eighteen-year-old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
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Original: The brothers got in a fight over the use of a Playstation 3 A sixteen-year-old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the sixteen-year-old had stabbed his eighteen-year-old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
Revised: The brothers got in a fight over the use of a Playstation 3 A sixteen-year-old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a PlayStation 3. Police reported that the sixteen-year-old had stabbed his eighteen-year-old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
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Original: The brothers got in a fight over the use of a Playstation 3 A sixteen-year-old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the sixteen-year-old had stabbed his eighteen-year-old brother after he turned the Playstation on without his younger brother’s permission.
Revised: The brothers got in a fight over the use of a Playstation 3 A sixteen-year-old boy from Santiago, Chile has been charged with the murder of his brother after the pair got in a fight over whose turn it was to use a Playstation 3. Police reported that the sixteen-year-old had stabbed his eighteen-year-old brother after he turned the PlayStation on without his younger brother’s permission.
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Original:  If convicted, the boy should stay five years in prison.
Revised:  If convicted, the boy would stay five years in prison.
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Original: At the time of the murder there was no one else in the building.
Revised: At the time of the death there was no one else in the building.
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Original:  The pair were  at gunpoint near the Mali and Algerian boarders.
Revised:  The pair were taken at gunpoint near the Mali and Algerian boarders.
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Original:  The area in which the kidnapping took place is known as the “red zone” . Several foreign offices recommend that tourists avoid the area near the Sahara.
Revised:  The area in which the kidnapping took place is known as the "red zone" . Several foreign offices recommend that tourists avoid the area near the Sahara.
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Original:  Algerian newspaper En Nahar said that the man was released in the Mali desert and made his own way back to Algeria.
Revised:  Apparently, he was released in the Mali desert and made his own way back to Algeria.
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Original:  The area in which the kidnapping took place is known as the "red zone" . Several foreign offices recommend that tourists avoid the area near the Sahara.
Revised:  The vicinity in which the kidnapping took place is known as the "red zone" . Several foreign offices recommend that tourists avoid the area near the Sahara.
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Original:  The area in which the kidnapping took place is known as the "red zone" . Several foreign offices recommend that tourists avoid the area near the Sahara.
Revised:  The area in which the kidnapping took place is known as the "red zone" ; foreign offices recommend that tourists avoid the area near the Sahara.
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Original:  After some explanations, they took him to Algeria, " said a Nigerien military source to the Reuters news service.
Revised:  After some explanations, they took him to Algeria, " 
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Original:   Let me just finish, James, please,  Novak said.
Revised:  " Let me just finish, James, please, Novak said.
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Original:   Let me just finish, James, please,  Novak said.
Revised:  Let me just finish, James, please, " Novak said.
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Original:   I know you hate to hear me, but you have to.
Revised:  " I know you hate to hear me, but you have to.
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Original:   Carville countered with, "He's got to show these right-wingers that he's got a backbone, you know.
Revised:  " Carville countered with, "He's got to show these right-wingers that he's got a backbone, you know.
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Original:   The discussion was shortened when Novak responded to Carville saying, "Well, I think that's bull****, and I hate that."
Revised:  " The discussion was shortened when Novak responded to Carville saying, "Well, I think that's bull****, and I hate that."
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Original:  CNN'' suspended Novak indefinitely, despite his apology to the organization.
Revised:  CNN suspended Novak indefinitely, despite his apology to the organization.
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Original: The discussion was shortened when Novak responded to Carville saying, "Well, I think that's bull**** , and I hate that."
Revised: The discussion was shortened when Novak responded to Carville saying, "Well, I think that's bullshit , and I hate that."
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Original:  " He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another 20 years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me a bigot."
Revised:  He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another 20 years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me a bigot."
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Original:  " He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another 20 years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me a bigot."
Revised:  " He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me a bigot."
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Original: Some political analysts have said the gaffe may hurt the Labour's chances in the upcoming elections;
Revised: Some political analysts have said the gaffe may hurt Labour's chances in the upcoming elections;
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Original:  He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him   [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me  ]  a bigot."
Revised:  He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him " [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me ] a bigot."
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Original:  He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him   [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me  ]  a bigot."
Revised:  He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me sic] a bigot."
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Original:  He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him   [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me  ]  a bigot."
Revised:  He's supposed to be leading the country and he's calling an ordinary woman who's come up and asked questions that most people would ask him [...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me ] I was called a bigot."
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Original: "[...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me a bigot," later adding: "I want to know why - them  comments I made there - why sic I was called a bigot."
Revised: "[...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me a bigot," later adding: "I want to know why - them sic comments I made there - why sic I was called a bigot."
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Original: "[...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me a bigot," later adding: "I want to know why - them  comments I made there - why sic I was called a bigot."
Revised: "[...] It's going to be tax, tax, tax for another twenty years to get out of this national debt, and he's calling me a bigot," later adding: "I want to know why - them comments I made there - why I was called a bigot."
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Original:  " Andrew Russell, a politics lecturer for Manchester University, commented on the situation.
Revised:  Andrew Russell, a politics lecturer for Manchester University, commented on the situation.
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Original:      Today marks the 30th anniversary since Alfred Hitchcock's death.
Revised:  These forgotten silent films made by a young Hitchcock are said to feature elements that characterize his later Hollywood works. These footages are going to be released in 2012 and expected to be aired as part of the Cultural Olympiad, although it still needs to be officially confirmed, it has been reported. Today marks the 30th anniversary since Alfred Hitchcock's death.
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Original:      Today marks the 30th anniversary since Alfred Hitchcock's death.
Revised:  30 years since his death Today marks the 30th anniversary since Alfred Hitchcock's death.
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Original:  His body was cremated and his ashes were thrown in the Pacific Ocean .
Revised:  His body was cremated and his ashes were thrown in the Pacific Ocean 
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Original:  Hitchcock's strange silent films restored At least nine of Hitchcock's rare silent films, made at the beginning of his career, will be staged in 2012 in many public screenings, The Independent has reported.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Three of Hitchcock's restored silent films are The Pleasure Garden (1925), The Lodger (1927) and The Farmer's Wife (1928)
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Original: At the time of the attack, officials had reported that Mehsud was killed along with ten other militants , but Pakistani sources now say he was only wounded in the attack.
Revised: At the time of the attack, officials reported that Mehsud was killed along with ten other militants , but Pakistani sources now say he was only wounded in the attack.
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Original: At the time of the attack, officials had reported that Mehsud was killed along with ten other militants , but Pakistani sources now say he was only wounded in the attack.
Revised: At the time of the attack, officials had reported that Mehsud was killed along with ten other rebe;s , but Pakistani sources now say he was only wounded in the attack.
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Original:  According to the unidentified sources, his authority within the Taliban had significantly diminished after the attack, however, and is now overshadowed by other commanders such as Waliur Rehman.
Revised:  According to unidentified sources, his authority within the Taliban had significantly diminished after the attack, however, and is now overshadowed by other commanders such as Waliur Rehman.
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Original:  According to the unidentified sources, his authority within the Taliban had significantly diminished after the attack, however, and is now overshadowed by other commanders such as Waliur Rehman.
Revised:  According to the unidentified sources, his authority within the Taliban had significantly diminished after the attack, and is now overshadowed by other commanders such as Waliur Rehman.
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Original:  A spokesman for the Pentagon in Washington, DC said that there was "no evidence" that Mehsud was "executing or exerting authority over the Pakistan Taliban as he once did . " He continued on, saying that "I don't know if that reflects him being alive or dead, but he clearly is not running the Pakistani Taliban anymore."
Revised:  A spokesman for the Pentagon in Washington, DC said that there was "no evidence" that Mehsud was "executing or exerting authority over the Pakistan Taliban as he once did " He continued on, saying that "I don't know if that reflects him being alive or dead, but he clearly is not running the Pakistani Taliban anymore."
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Original:  A spokesman for the Pentagon in Washington, DC said that there was "no evidence" that Mehsud was "executing or exerting authority over the Pakistan Taliban as he once did . " He continued on, saying that "I don't know if that reflects him being alive or dead, but he clearly is not running the Pakistani Taliban anymore."
Revised:  A spokesman for the Pentagon in Washington, DC said that there was "no evidence" that Mehsud was "executing or exerting authority over the Pakistan Taliban as he once did . " , adding: "I don't know if that reflects him being alive or dead, but he clearly is not running the Pakistani Taliban anymore."
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Original:  The Taliban had continuously denied reports Mehsud was killed, although they refused to offer proof such as videos, saying that they could pin Mehsud to a specific location.
Revised:  The Taliban continuously denied reports Mehsud was killed, although they refused to offer proof such as videos, saying that they could pin Mehsud to a specific location.
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Original:  The Taliban had continuously denied reports Mehsud was killed, although they refused to offer proof such as videos, saying that they could pin Mehsud to a specific location.
Revised:  The Taliban had continuously denied reports Mehsud was killed, although they refused to offer proof such as videos, saying it could pin Mehsud to a specific location.
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Original:  According to the BBC, however, claims that Mehsud had been killed had always been suspect, as the Taliban neither officially announced his death nor announced the new leader that would have taken his place , both common practices
Revised:  According to the BBC, however, claims that Mehsud had been killed were always suspect, as the Taliban neither officially announced his death nor announced the new leader that would have taken his place , both common practices
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Original:  According to the BBC, however, claims that Mehsud had been killed had always been suspect, as the Taliban neither officially announced his death nor announced the new leader that would have taken his place , both common practices
Revised:  According to the BBC, however, claims that Mehsud had been killed had always been suspect, as the Taliban neither officially announced his death nor announced a new leader that would have taken his place , both common practices
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Original:  According to the BBC, however, claims that Mehsud had been killed had always been suspect, as the Taliban neither officially announced his death nor announced the new leader that would have taken his place , both common practices
Revised:  According to the BBC, however, claims that Mehsud had been killed had always been suspect, as the Taliban neither officially announced his death nor announced the new leader that would have taken his place - both common practices
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Original: At the time of the attack, officials reported that Mehsud was killed along with ten other rebe;s , but Pakistani sources now say he was only wounded in the attack.
Revised: At the time of the attack, officials reported that Mehsud was killed along with ten other rebels , but Pakistani sources now say he was only wounded in the attack.
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Original: 250px|First XV News coverage of the game Maffra will play Drouin in the 2010 Gippsland Football League grand final.
Revised:  Maffra will play Drouin in the 2010 Gippsland Football League grand final.
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Original: First QuarterMaffra 4-7 Drouin 3-1 Second QuarterMaffra 8-10Drouin 8-8 Third QuarterMaffra 13-14Drouin 12-9 First Quarter Goal kickers: Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00) . Second Quarter Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00).
Revised: First QuarterMaffra 4-7 Drouin 3-1 Second QuarterMaffra 8-10Drouin 8-8 Third QuarterMaffra 13-14Drouin 12-9 Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00) . Second Quarter Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00).
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Original: First QuarterMaffra 4-7 Drouin 3-1 Second QuarterMaffra 8-10Drouin 8-8 Third QuarterMaffra 13-14Drouin 12-9 First Quarter Goal kickers: Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00) . Second Quarter Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00).
Revised: First QuarterMaffra 4-7 Drouin 3-1 Second QuarterMaffra 8-10Drouin 8-8 Third QuarterMaffra 13-14Drouin 12-9 First Quarter Goal kickers: Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00) . Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00).
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Original: First QuarterMaffra 4-7 Drouin 3-1 Second QuarterMaffra 8-10Drouin 8-8 Third QuarterMaffra 13-14Drouin 12-9 First Quarter Goal kickers: Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00) . Second Quarter Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00).
Revised: First QuarterMaffra 4-7 Drouin 3-1 Second QuarterMaffra 8-10Drouin 8-8 Third QuarterMaffra 13-14Drouin 12-9 First Quarter Goal kickers: Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00) . Second Quarter 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Third Quarter Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00) . Fourth Quarter Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00) , Drouin0-0 (00 ).
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00), Drouin 0-0 (00) . Fourth Quarter Quarter score: Maffra 0-0 (00) , Drouin0-0 (00 ).
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Original: The proposal received 134 votes in the lower house of federal parliament with two abstentions and nobody opposing.
Revised: The proposal received 134 votes in the lower house of with two abstentions and nobody opposing.
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Original:  The proposal will now go to the Belgian Senate , where it is expected not to be blocked;
Revised:  The proposal will now go to the , where it is expected not to be blocked;
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Original:  "It's not about introducing any form of discrimination," commented Daniel Bacquelaine, head of the liberal MR party in the parliament.
Revised:  "It's not about introducing any form of discrimination," commented Daniel Bacquelaine, head of the liberal in the parliament.
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Original: A recent Medicare law change allows someone to sue on behalf of Medicare.
Revised: The Medicare Secondary Payer Statute (MSP) allows someone to sue on behalf of Medicare.
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Original:  The MSP staute was entered in part because the government does not have the resources to prosecute every case under Medicare law.
Revised:  The MSP statute was entered in part because the government does not have the resources to prosecute every case under Medicare law.
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Original: A U.S. lobbyist group, the United Seniors Association , filed a lawsuit in U.S. District Court in Boston to recover Medicare expenses related to tobacco smoking.
Revised: A U.S. lobbyist group, the United Seniors Association , filed a lawsuit in U.S. District Court in to recover expenses related to tobacco smoking.
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Original:  The suit says there is a link between nicotine addiction and smoking-related diseases.
Revised:  The suit says there is a link between and smoking-related diseases.
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Original:  The note blamed the government for refusing to negotiate on the desired release of the jailed Pakistani militants  
Revised:  The note blamed the government for refusing to negotiate on the desired release of the jailed Pakistani militants . 
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