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Original:  Landing was scheduled for 09:30 GMT , however it is currently unclear what time it actually occurred at, owing to a communication outage.
Revised:  Landing was scheduled for 09:30 UTC , however it is currently unclear what time it actually occurred at, owing to a communication outage.
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Original:  All three crewmembers were reported to be alive, and in satisfactory health.
Revised:  All three crewmembers were reported to be in satisfactory health.
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Original:  Mr. Tsvangirai has said that the delay in releasing the elections results is because Mr. Mugabe wants to "steal the election."
Revised:  Mr. Tsvangirai has said that the delay in releasing the election results is because Mr. Mugabe wants to "steal the election."
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Original: The South African government, which prefers 'quiet diplomacy' over 'megaphone diplomacy' when handling Zimbabwe said that the cargo was legally permitted to cross through South Africa, Defence Secretary January Masilela stating that "if the buyer is the Zimbabwean sovereign government and the seller is the Chinese sovereign government, South Africa has nothing to do with that".
Revised: The South African government, which prefers 'quiet diplomacy' over 'megaphone diplomacy' when handling Zimbabwe said that the cargo was legally permitted to cross through South Africa, Defence Secretary January Masilela stated that "if the buyer is the Zimbabwean sovereign government and the seller is the Chinese sovereign government, South Africa has nothing to do with that".
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Original: This comes after China , soon to host the Olympic games in Beijing, has come under world scrutiny for its human rights record and after Zimbabwean president Robert Mugabe created further rifts internationally by denouncing opposing nations.
Revised: This comes after China has come under world scrutiny for its human rights record and after Zimbabwean president Robert Mugabe created further rifts internationally by denouncing opposing nations.
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Original: Today, an emotional service took place at Elim Christian College to remember Floyd Fernandes, who died in this weeks canyoning tragedy in the North Island of New Zealand.
Revised: Today, an emotional service took place at Elim Christian College to remember Floyd Fernandes, who died in this weeks canyoning tragedy on the North Island of New Zealand.
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Original:    It has been suggested by police that the fire may have been a vengeful act of arson  
Revised:  58 girls are thought to have been in the dorm at the time, which had been locked from the outside. Some mannaged to escape by wriggling through narrow windows. By the time fire services reached the scene, 15 kilometres from Kampala, most of the dorm had already been desroyed by the intense fire. It has been suggested by police that the fire may have been a vengeful act of arson 
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Original:  Earlier reports also say two adults died, but later sources make no mention of this.
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Original:  Sekradde spoke of an act of herroinism by 10-year-old Yvonne Namaganda, who was able to rescue six of her fellows before poisnonous fumes overcame her upon her return for a seventh
Revised:  Sekradde spoke of an act of heroism by 10-year-old Yvonne Namaganda, who was able to rescue six of her fellows before poisnonous fumes overcame her upon her return for a seventh
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Original:  Paya, lead organizer of the Varela Project, commented to the Associated Press that his decision was based on "...a distrust of where these people come from," calling their effort "a smoke screen.  
Revised:  Paya, lead organizer of the Varela Project, commented to the Associated Press that his decision was based on "...a distrust of where these people come from," calling their effort "a smoke screen. " 
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Original: Dissident Meeting Held in Cuba It is reported that some 200 people gathered on Friday to open what has been touted as a rare opposition assembly against the government of Cuba.
Revised:  It is reported that some 200 people gathered on Friday to open what has been touted as a rare opposition assembly against the government of Cuba.
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Original:  "A good majority of the badminton team, and almost every single fob" were cited cited as the victims in the post.
Revised:  "A good majority of the badminton team, and almost every single fob" were cited as the victims in the post.
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Original:  "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..." The post named a hit list of specific students . " A good majority of the badminton team , and almost every single fob  " were cited as the victims in the post.
Revised:  The post named a hit list of specific students . " A good majority of the badminton team , and almost every single fob " were cited as the victims in the post.
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Original:  "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..." The post named a hit list of specific students . " A good majority of the badminton team , and almost every single fob  " were cited as the victims in the post.
Revised:  "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..." The post named a hit list of specific students . " a good majority of the badminton team , and almost every single fob " were cited as the victims in the post.
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Original:  "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..." The post named a hit list of specific students . " A good majority of the badminton team , and almost every single fob  " were cited as the victims in the post.
Revised:  "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..." The post named a hit list of specific students . " A good majority of the badminton team and almost every single fob " were cited as the victims in the post.
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Original:  "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..." The post named a hit list of specific students . " A good majority of the badminton team , and almost every single fob  " were cited as the victims in the post.
Revised:  "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..." The post named a hit list of specific students . " A good majority of the badminton team , and almost every single fob . " were cited as the victims in the post.
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Original:  "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..." The post named a hit list of specific students . " A good majority of the badminton team , and almost every single fob  " were cited as the victims in the post.
Revised:  "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..." The post named a hit list of specific students . " A good majority of the badminton team , and almost every single fob " The poster threatened: "Take this text down and it will guarantee their death..."
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Original: The student was arrested on Friday at approximately 11:30 a.m. PST , according to a statement from Hacienda La Puente Unified School District Department of Police and Safety Chief Al Vasquez made to Pasadena Star-News.
Revised: The student was arrested on Friday at approximately 11:30 a.m. PDT , according to a statement from Hacienda La Puente Unified School District Department of Police and Safety Chief Al Vasquez made to Pasadena Star-News.
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Original:  The threats were later removed from the edit history of the article by Wikipedia administrator Persian Poet Gal, at 9:08 p.m. PST on Friday, after the student had been arrested.
Revised:  The threats were later removed from the edit history of the article by Wikipedia administrator Persian Poet Gal, at 9:08 p.m. PDT on Friday, after the student had been arrested.
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Original:  Pacific Daylight Time , according to a statement from Hacienda La Puente Unified School District Department of Police and Safety Chief Al Vasquez made to Pasadena Star-News.
Revised:  PDT , according to a statement from Hacienda La Puente Unified School District Department of Police and Safety Chief Al Vasquez made to Pasadena Star-News.
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Original:  Current list of victims to be shot on this day: ...", said the initial post.
Revised:  Current list of victims to be sucked off on this day: ...", said the initial post.
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Original: Going against the Bush administration's opposition to the Kyoto Protocol, 130 U.S. mayors have pledged to meet or beat certain Kyoto targets by 2012 - despite the fact that there is no evidence that global warming, if it truly exists, is due to human activities.
Revised: Going against the Bush administration's opposition to the Kyoto Protocol, 130 U.S. mayors have pledged to meet or beat certain Kyoto targets by 2012.
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Original:  Examples include anti-sprawl land-use policies or encouraging cruise lines to turn off their engines while docked   .
Revised:  Examples include anti-sprawl land-use policies or encouraging cruise lines to turn off their engines while docked . .
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Original: 130 U.S. Mayors back global warming pact Going against the Bush administration's opposition to the Kyoto Protocol, 130 U.S. mayors have pledged to meet or beat certain Kyoto targets by 2012.
Revised:  Going against the Bush administration's opposition to the Kyoto Protocol, 130 U.S. mayors have pledged to meet or beat certain Kyoto targets by 2012.
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Original:  They point to a lack of clear evidence that global warming is due to human activities.
Revised:  They point to a lack of clear evidence that global warming is due to human 
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Original: Going against the Bush administration's opposition to the Kyoto Protocol,  130 U.S. mayors have pledged to meet or beat certain Kyoto targets by 2012.
Revised: Going against the Bush administration's opposition to the Kyoto Protocol, more than 130 U.S. mayors have pledged to meet or beat certain Kyoto targets by 2012.
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Original:  Critics of the Kyoto Protocol claim it is unnecessary, due to an alleged or perceived lack of clear evidence that global warming is due to human activitie  
Revised:  Critics of the Kyoto Protocol claim it is unnecessary, due to an alleged or perceived lack of clear evidence that global warming is due to human activities. 
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Original: Participating Mayors As of 2005-05-25 Leaders Joining Seattle Mayor Greg Nickels to lead the US Mayors Climate Protection Agreement are:
Revised: Participating Mayors Leaders Joining Seattle Mayor Greg Nickels to lead the US Mayors Climate Protection Agreement are:
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Original:  "We know that it registered its next destination as Luanda because here we wouldn't allow it into Mozambican waters without prior arrangements", he told Reuters earlier today  
Revised:  "We know that it registered its next destination as Luanda because here we wouldn't allow it into Mozambican waters without prior arrangements", he told Reuters earlier today . 
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Original:  Several arrests have since been made in connexion with the recount.
Revised:  Several arrests have since been made in connection with the recount.
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Original:  Several arrests have since been made in connection with the recount.
Revised:  Several arrests have since been made in relation to the recount.
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Original:  Several arrests have since been made in relation to the recount.
Revised:  Several arrests have since been made in connexion with the recount.
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Original:  Despite this MDC leader Morgan Tsvangirai, who is currently staying in South Africa for his own safety, claims to have won both parlimentary and presidential elections outright.
Revised:  Despite this MDC leader Morgan Tsvangirai, who is currently staying in South Africa for his own safety, claims to have won both parliamentary and presidential elections outright.
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Original: The group planned  take the CNN website offline by flooding its servers with internet traffic, in what is known as a distributed denial of service (DDoS) attack.
Revised: The group planned to take the CNN website offline by flooding its servers with internet traffic, in what is known as a distributed denial of service (DDoS) attack.
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Original: Despite the attack being calling off, some had apparently decided to proceed earlier than expected.
Revised: Despite the attack being called off, some had apparently decided to proceed earlier than expected.
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Original:  The driver of the SUV had survived, and is being detained on suspicion of drink driving , Spanish newspaper Sur claiming a breathalyser test revealed twice the legal blood alcohol limit.
Revised:  The driver of the SUV had survived, and is being detained on suspicion of driving under the influence of alcohol. Spanish newspaper Sur claiming a breathalyser test revealed twice the legal blood alcohol limit.
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Original:  The driver of the SUV had survived, and is being detained on suspicion of driving under the influence of alcohol.
Revised:  The driver of the SUV had survived, and is being detained on suspicion of drink driving,
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Original: Germaine Tillion, French World War II resistance fighter and anthropologist has died today at the age of 100.
Revised: Germaine Tillion, French World War II resistance fighter and anthropologist , died today at the age of 100.
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Original:   In the 1950s  during the Algerian War of Independence  Tillion served as an adviser to the French government in Algeria on its social policies, helping the government to set up 'Social Centres'.
Revised:  In the 1950s , during the Algerian War of Independence Tillion served as an adviser to the French government in Algeria on its social policies, helping the government to set up 'Social Centres'.
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Original:   In the 1950s  during the Algerian War of Independence  Tillion served as an adviser to the French government in Algeria on its social policies, helping the government to set up 'Social Centres'.
Revised:  In the 1950s during the Algerian War of Independence , Tillion served as an adviser to the French government in Algeria on its social policies, helping the government to set up 'Social Centres'.
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Original:  During this period, at the time of the battle of Algiers, she served as a liaison between the National Liberation Front leader Saadi Yacef and the French government, and helped arranged several cease-fires.
Revised:  During this period, at the time of the battle of Algiers, she served as a liaison between the National Liberation Front leader Saadi Yacef and the French government, helping to arrange several cease-fires.
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Original:  Tillion was among the first to denounce the use of torture by French forces in the war   .
Revised:  Tillion was among the first to denounce the use of torture by French forces in the war . .
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Original:  Before 1940 and the fall of France she had already made 4 trips to Algeria, spending time there with the w: Berber people.
Revised:  Before 1940 and the fall of France she had already made 4 trips to Algeria, spending time there with the Berber people.
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Original:  During World War II she was a founding member of fr: Groupe du musée de l'Homme, part of the French Resistance, which led to her arrest and being sent to Ravensbruck concentration camp.
Revised:  During World War II she was a founding member of Groupe du musée de l'Homme, part of the French Resistance, which led to her arrest and being sent to Ravensbruck concentration camp.
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Original:  Mme Tillion was one of the most decorated women in France, one of only five to be presented with the w: fr:Grand-croix de la Légion d’honneur.
Revised:  Mme Tillion was one of the most decorated women in France, one of only five to be presented with the fr:Grand-croix de la Légion d’honneur.
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Original:  Tillion was among the first to denounce the use of torture by French forces in the war. pewp
Revised:  Tillion was among the first to denounce the use of torture by French forces in the war. 
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Original:  In 1995, an outbreak of Ebola led to the death of 250 people in the Democratic Republic of Congo.
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Original:  Scientists believe that in past outbreaks the disease originated from infected monkey meat, or Bushmeat.
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Original:  Although no cure exists, work continues on a vaccine and it is in the human trial stages  as well as research into pharmaceutical treaments
Revised:  Although no cure exists, work continues on a vaccine and it is in the human trial stages , as well as research into pharmaceutical treaments
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Original:  Although no cure exists, work continues on a vaccine and it is in the human trial stages, as well as research into pharmaceutical treaments
Revised:  Although no cure exists, work continues on a vaccine and it is in the human trial stages, as well as research into pharmaceutical treatments
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Original: Since 1978 the People's Republic of China (PRC) government has been reforming its economy from a Soviet-style centrally planned economy to a more market-oriented economy but still within a rigid political framework of Communist Party of China control;
Revised: Beginning in 1978 the People's Republic of China (PRC) government has been reforming its economy from a Soviet-style centrally planned economy to a more market-oriented economy but still within a rigid political framework of Communist Party of China control;
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Original: Since 1978 the People's Republic of China (PRC) government has been reforming its economy from a Soviet-style centrally planned economy to a more market-oriented economy but still within a rigid political framework of Communist Party of China control;
Revised: Since 1978 , the Chinese economy has been transforming from a Soviet-style centrally planned economy to a more market-oriented economy but still within a rigid political framework of Communist Party of China control;
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Original: Since 1978 the People's Republic of China (PRC) government has been reforming its economy from a Soviet-style centrally planned economy to a more market-oriented economy but still within a rigid political framework of Communist Party of China control;
Revised: Since 1978 the People's Republic of China (PRC) government has been reforming its economy from a Soviet-style centrally planned economy to more of a free market style system, under the rigid political control of Communist Party of China control;
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Original:  To this end, the government has focused on foreign trade as a major vehicle for economic growth.
Revised:  To this end, the government has leveraged foreign trade to stimulate economic growth.
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Original:  It is said that by 2012 the People's Republic of China will be the nation with the highest GDP in the world , even higher than the United States .
Revised:  By 2012 the People's Republic of China will be the nation with the highest GDP in the world , even higher than the United States .
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Original:  It is said that by 2012 the People's Republic of China will be the nation with the highest GDP in the world , even higher than the United States .
Revised:  It is said that by 2012 the People's Republic of China may have the highest GDP in the world , even higher than the United States .
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Original:  It is said that by 2012 the People's Republic of China will be the nation with the highest GDP in the world , even higher than the United States .
Revised:  It is said that by 2012 the People's Republic of China will be the nation with the highest GDP in the world .
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Original:  According to U.S. statistics, China had a trade surplus with the U.S. of $170 billion in 2004, more than doubling from 1999.
Revised:  According to U.S. statistics, China had a trade surplus with the U.S. of $170 billion .
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Original:  Wal-Mart , the United States' largest retailer, is China's 7th largest export partner, just ahead of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  Wal-Mart is China's 7th largest export partner, just ahead of the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Wal-Mart , the United States' largest retailer, is China's 7th largest export partner, just ahead of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  Wal-Mart , the United States' largest retailer, is China's seventh largest export partner, just ahead of the United Kingdom.
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Original:  The Chinese leadership has often experienced the worst results of socialism ( bureaucracy, lassitude, corruption ) and of Capitalism (windfall gains and stepped-up inflation) .
Revised:  The Chinese leadership has often experienced the worst results of socialism and Capitalism: bureaucracy, lassitude, corruption ) and of Capitalism (windfall gains and stepped-up inflation) .
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Original:  The Chinese leadership has often experienced the worst results of socialism ( bureaucracy, lassitude, corruption ) and of Capitalism (windfall gains and stepped-up inflation) .
Revised:  The Chinese leadership has often experienced the worst results of socialism ( bureaucracy, lassitude, corruption , and inflation .
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Original:  A longer-term threat to continued rapid economic growthis the deterioration in the environment, notably air and water pollution, soil erosion, and the steady fall of the water table especially in the north.
Revised:  Environmental deterioration is a longer-term threat to continued rapid economic growthis the deterioration in the environment, notably air and water pollution, soil erosion, and the steady fall of the water table especially in the north.
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Original:  The World Health Organization in 1998 reported that seven of the 10 most-polluted cities were in China.
Revised:  The World Health Organization reported that China had seven of the 10 most-polluted cities were in China.
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Original:  While this is a four-fold increase, it is not expected to affect consumer prices.
Revised:  While this is a fourfold increase, it is not expected to affect consumer prices.
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Original:  The result has been a four-fold increase in GDP, making China the sixth largest economy in the world.
Revised:  The result has been a fourfold increase in GDP, making China the sixth largest economy in the world.
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Original:  This is despite the fact that many news reports from the time of the evacuation, including those from BBC News indicated that they would be able to return yesterday  
Revised:  This is despite the fact that many news reports from the time of the evacuation, including those from BBC News indicated that they would be able to return yesterday . 
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Original: "It’s like Jesus Christ visiting America,” Clemens Semon, 50, a resident of Ozone Park who immigrated from Ivory Coast to The New York Times.
Revised: "It’s like Jesus Christ visiting America,” Clemens Semon, 50, a resident of Ozone Park who immigrated from Ivory Coast told The New York Times.
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Original: It also marked the 200th anniversary of the archdioces in New York, Philadelphia, Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Boston and Louisville, which were all created in  1808.
Revised: It also marked the 200th anniversary of the archdioces in New York, Philadelphia, Boston and Louisville, which were all created in 1808.
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Original:  He’s a unifier, he brings hope and peace." 250px|Left|Pope Benedict XVI delivers remarks at a farewell ceremony at JFK Airport in New York on Sunday, April 20, 2008.
Revised:  He’s a unifier, he brings hope and peace." 250px|Left|Pope Benedict XVI delivers remarks at farewell ceremony at JFK Airport in New York on Sunday, April 20, 2008.
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Original:  White House photo by Shealah Craighead Vice President Dick Cheney and Mrs.
Revised:  White House photo by Shealah Craighead Vice President Dick Cheney and his wife
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