wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Our analysis shows that large-scale vaccination projects have been responsible for a very large  reduction in influenza severity in the last century, a reduction which is hidden from short-term studies  .
Revised:  Our analysis shows that large-scale vaccination programs have been responsible for a very large reduction in influenza severity in the last century, a reduction which is hidden from short-term studies .
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Original:  Our analysis shows that large-scale vaccination projects have been responsible for a very large  reduction in influenza severity in the last century, a reduction which is hidden from short-term studies  .
Revised:  Our analysis shows that large-scale vaccination projects have been responsible for a very large reduction in influenza severity in the last century, a reduction which is hidden from short-term studies of vaccine effectiveness .
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Original:  To use the MGD to help solve major biomedical problems, we here asked whether extreme values in genetic diversity as represented by the amount of minor alleles (MAs) of common SNPs may represent extreme trait values and common diseases.
Revised:  To use the MGD to help solve major biomedical problems, we here asked whether extreme values in genetic diversity as represented by the amount of minor alleles (MAs) carried by an individual may represent extreme trait values and common diseases.
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Original:  We also analyzed 21 published GWAS datasets of human diseases and identified the MA fractions of each case or control.
Revised:  We also analyzed 21 published GWAS datasets of human diseases and identified the MAC of each case or control.
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Original:  MA amounts in model organisms were nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits  including life span, tumor susceptibility, anxiety, depression, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol , methamphetamine, cocaine, pain and anti-psychotic drugs, levels in glucose, insulin, resistin, iron, and dopamine, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
Revised:  MAC was nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits including life span, tumor susceptibility, anxiety, depression, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol , methamphetamine, cocaine, pain and anti-psychotic drugs, levels in glucose, insulin, resistin, iron, and dopamine, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
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Original:  MA amounts in model organisms were nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits  including life span, tumor susceptibility, anxiety, depression, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol , methamphetamine, cocaine, pain and anti-psychotic drugs, levels in glucose, insulin, resistin, iron, and dopamine, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
Revised:  MA amounts in model organisms were nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits in model organisms, including life span, tumor susceptibility, anxiety, depression, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol , methamphetamine, cocaine, pain and anti-psychotic drugs, levels in glucose, insulin, resistin, iron, and dopamine, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
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Original:  MA amounts in model organisms were nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits  including life span, tumor susceptibility, anxiety, depression, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol , methamphetamine, cocaine, pain and anti-psychotic drugs, levels in glucose, insulin, resistin, iron, and dopamine, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
Revised:  MA amounts in model organisms were nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits including life span, tumor susceptibility, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol , methamphetamine, cocaine, pain and anti-psychotic drugs, levels in glucose, insulin, resistin, iron, and dopamine, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
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Original:  MA amounts in model organisms were nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits  including life span, tumor susceptibility, anxiety, depression, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol , methamphetamine, cocaine, pain and anti-psychotic drugs, levels in glucose, insulin, resistin, iron, and dopamine, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
Revised:  MA amounts in model organisms were nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits including life span, tumor susceptibility, anxiety, depression, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol and anti-psychotic drugs, levels in glucose, insulin, resistin, iron, and dopamine, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
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Original:  MA amounts in model organisms were nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits  including life span, tumor susceptibility, anxiety, depression, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol , methamphetamine, cocaine, pain and anti-psychotic drugs, levels in glucose, insulin, resistin, iron, and dopamine, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
Revised:  MA amounts in model organisms were nearly linearly linked to quantitative variations in numerous traits including life span, tumor susceptibility, anxiety, depression, learning and memory, sensitivity to alcohol , methamphetamine, cocaine, pain and anti-psychotic drugs, and two correlated traits poor reproductive fitness and strong immunity.
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Original:  Similarly, in Europeans or European Americans, enrichment of MAs of fast but not slow evolutionary rate was linked to autoimmune and numerous other diseases  including type 2 diabetes, Parkinson  disease, psychiatric disorders, alcohol and cocaine addictions, cancer, and less life span.
Revised:  Similarly, in Europeans or European Americans, enrichment of MAs of fast but not slow evolutionary rate was linked to autoimmune and numerous other diseases , including type 2 diabetes, Parkinson disease, psychiatric disorders, alcohol and cocaine addictions, cancer, and less life span.
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Original:  Similarly, in Europeans or European Americans, enrichment of MAs of fast but not slow evolutionary rate was linked to autoimmune and numerous other diseases  including type 2 diabetes, Parkinson  disease, psychiatric disorders, alcohol and cocaine addictions, cancer, and less life span.
Revised:  Similarly, in Europeans or European Americans, enrichment of MAs of fast but not slow evolutionary rate was linked to autoimmune and numerous other diseases including type 2 diabetes, Parkinson 's disease, psychiatric disorders, alcohol and cocaine addictions, cancer, and less life span.
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Original:  Therefore, both high and low MA amounts correlated with extreme values in many traits and are hence negatively selected, indicating that most MAsmay be nearly neutral or slightly deleterious due to both positive and negative selection.
Revised:  Therefore, both high and low MAC correlated with extreme values in many traits and are hence negatively selected, indicating that most MAsmay be nearly neutral or slightly deleterious due to both positive and negative selection.
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Original:  Here we introduce a new class of spike train metrics, inspired by the Pompeiu-Hausdorff distance  . Some of our new metrics (the max-metric and the modulus-metric) are sensitive to differences in the precise timings of spikes in the considered spike trains that cannot be discriminated by existing metrics like the van Rossum distance or the Victor & Purpura distance  .
Revised:  Here we introduce a new class of spike train metrics, inspired by the Pompeiu-Hausdorff distance . Some of our new metrics (the max-metric and the modulus-metric) have characteristics that are qualitatively different than those of classical metrics like the van Rossum distance or the Victor & Purpura distance .
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Original:  Some of our new metrics (the max-metric and the modulus-metric ) have characteristics that are qualitatively different than those of classical metrics like the van Rossum distance or the Victor & Purpura distance.
Revised:  Some of our new metrics (the modulus-metric and the max-metric ) have characteristics that are qualitatively different than those of classical metrics like the van Rossum distance or the Victor & Purpura distance.
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Original:  The max-metric and the modulus-metric are particularly suitable for measuring distances between spike trains where information is encoded in bursts, but the number and the timing of spikes inside a burst does not carry information.
Revised:  The modulus-metric and the max-metric are particularly suitable for measuring distances between spike trains where information is encoded in bursts, but the number and the timing of spikes inside a burst does not carry information.
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Original: The question of reliability%DIFDELCMD < } %%% arises for any dynamical system driven by an input signal : if the same signal is presented many times with different initial conditions , will the system entrain to the signal in a repeatable way?
Revised:  reliability%DIFDELCMD < } %%% arises for any dynamical system driven by an input signal : if the same signal is presented many times with different initial conditions , will the system entrain to the signal in a repeatable way?
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Original: The question of reliability%DIFDELCMD < } %%% arises for any dynamical system driven by an input signal : if the same signal is presented many times with different initial conditions , will the system entrain to the signal in a repeatable way?
Revised: The question of %DIFDELCMD < } %%% arises for any dynamical system driven by an input signal : if the same signal is presented many times with different initial conditions , will the system entrain to the signal in a repeatable way?
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Original: The question of reliability%DIFDELCMD < } %%% arises for any dynamical system driven by an input signal : if the same signal is presented many times with different initial conditions , will the system entrain to the signal in a repeatable way?
Revised: The question of reliability%DIFDELCMD < } %%% Biological information processing is often carried out by complex networks of interconnected dynamical units. A basic question about such networks is that of reliability : if the same signal is presented many times with different initial conditions , will the system entrain to the signal in a repeatable way?
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Original: The question of reliability%DIFDELCMD < } %%% arises for any dynamical system driven by an input signal : if the same signal is presented many times with different initial conditions , will the system entrain to the signal in a repeatable way?
Revised: The question of reliability%DIFDELCMD < } %%% arises for any dynamical system driven by an input signal : if the same signal is presented many times with the network in different initial states , will the system entrain to the signal in a repeatable way?
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Original:  Reliability is of particular interest in large, randomly coupled networks of excitatory and inhibitory units.
Revised:  Reliability is of particular interest in neuroscience, where large, complex networks of excitatory and inhibitory units.
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Original:  Such networks are ubiquitous in neuroscience, but are known to autonomously produce strongly chaotic dynamics -- an obvious threat to reliability.
Revised:  Such networks are ubiquitous in neuroscience, but are known to autonomously produce strongly chaotic dynamics - an obvious threat to reliability.
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Original:  Here, we show that such chaos also occurs in the presence of weak and strong stimuli .
Revised:  Here, we show that such chaos persists in the presence of weak and strong stimuli .
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Original:  However, even in the chaotic regime , intermittent periods of highly reliable spiking often coexist with unreliable activity.
Revised:  However, even in the presence of chaos , intermittent periods of highly reliable spiking often coexist with unreliable activity.
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Original:  We argue that the sustained coexistence of chaos and reliable spike events is due to the interaction of global state space expansion and dynamics local to individual cells, and interpret our findings within the framework of random dynamical systems theory .
Revised:  We elucidate the local dynamical mechanisms involved in this intermittent reliability, and investigate the relationship between this phenomenon and certain time-dependent attractors arising from the dynamics. A conclusion is that chaotic dynamics do not have to be an obstacle to precise spike responses, a fact with implications for signal coding in large networks .
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Original:  Here we develop an analytic methodology connecting the hydrophobic shape of membrane proteins to the cooperative function of membrane proteins induced by bilayer-mediated elastic interactions.
Revised:  Here we explore the relation between the shape of membrane proteins to the cooperative function of membrane proteins induced by bilayer-mediated elastic interactions.
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Original:  Here we develop an analytic methodology connecting the hydrophobic shape of membrane proteins to the cooperative function of membrane proteins induced by bilayer-mediated elastic interactions.
Revised:  Here we develop an analytic methodology connecting the hydrophobic shape of membrane proteins and the cooperative function of membrane proteins induced by bilayer-mediated elastic interactions.
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Original:  Here we develop an analytic methodology connecting the hydrophobic shape of membrane proteins to the cooperative function of membrane proteins induced by bilayer-mediated elastic interactions.
Revised:  Here we develop an analytic methodology connecting the hydrophobic shape of membrane proteins to the cooperative function of membrane proteins induced by membrane-mediated elastic interactions.
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Original:  Application of this methodology to mechanosensitive channels shows that , in addition to protein separation and bilayer material properties, the sign and strength of elastic interactions , and associated cooperative gating characteristics, can depend on the protein shape and orientation .
Revised:  For the experimental model system of mechanosensitive ion channels we find that the sign and strength of elastic interactions , and associated cooperative gating characteristics, can depend on the protein shape and orientation .
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Original:  Application of this methodology to mechanosensitive channels shows that , in addition to protein separation and bilayer material properties, the sign and strength of elastic interactions , and associated cooperative gating characteristics, can depend on the protein shape and orientation .
Revised:  Application of this methodology to mechanosensitive channels shows that , in addition to protein separation and bilayer material properties, the sign and strength of elastic interactions depend on the protein shape and orientation .
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Original: In this article I trace the historical development of tumour growth laws, which in a quantitative fashion describe the increase in tumour mass/volume over time.
Revised: In this article we shall trace the historical development of tumour growth laws, which in a quantitative fashion describe the increase in tumour mass/volume over time.
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Original:  These models are usually formu- lated in terms of differential equations that relate the growth rate of the tumour to its current state, and range from the simple one-parameter exponential growth model, to more advanced models that contain a large number of parameters.
Revised:  These models are usually formulated in terms of differential equations that relate the growth rate of the tumour to its current state, and range from the simple one-parameter exponential growth model, to more advanced models that contain a large number of parameters.
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Original:   The conclusion of this brief survey is that although much improvement has occured over the last century, more effort and new models are required if we are to understand the intricacies of tumour growth.
Revised:  The conclusion of this brief survey is that although much improvement has occurred over the last century, more effort and new models are required if we are to understand the intricacies of tumour growth.
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Original:  Although the performance of the medium access control (MAC) of this protocol has been thoroughly investigated under the assumption of ideal wireless channel, there is still a lack of understanding of the crosslayer dynamics between MAC and physical layer in the presence of realistic wireless channel models that include path loss, multi-path fading  and shadowing.
Revised:  Although the performance of the medium access control (MAC) of this protocol has been thoroughly investigated under the assumption of ideal wireless channel, the understanding of the crosslayer dynamics between MAC and physical layer in the presence of realistic wireless channel models that include path loss, multi-path fading and shadowing.
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Original:  Although the performance of the medium access control (MAC) of this protocol has been thoroughly investigated under the assumption of ideal wireless channel, there is still a lack of understanding of the crosslayer dynamics between MAC and physical layer in the presence of realistic wireless channel models that include path loss, multi-path fading  and shadowing.
Revised:  Although the performance of the medium access control (MAC) of this protocol has been thoroughly investigated under the assumption of ideal wireless channel, there is still a lack of understanding of the cross-layer dynamics between MAC and physical layer in the presence of realistic wireless channel models that include path loss, multi-path fading and shadowing.
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Original:  Although the performance of the medium access control (MAC) of this protocol has been thoroughly investigated under the assumption of ideal wireless channel, there is still a lack of understanding of the crosslayer dynamics between MAC and physical layer in the presence of realistic wireless channel models that include path loss, multi-path fading  and shadowing.
Revised:  Although the performance of the medium access control (MAC) of this protocol has been thoroughly investigated under the assumption of ideal wireless channel, there is still a lack of understanding of the crosslayer dynamics between MAC and physical layer is an open problem when the wireless channel exhibits path loss, multi-path fading and shadowing.
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Original:  Although the performance of the medium access control (MAC) of this protocol has been thoroughly investigated under the assumption of ideal wireless channel, there is still a lack of understanding of the crosslayer dynamics between MAC and physical layer in the presence of realistic wireless channel models that include path loss, multi-path fading  and shadowing.
Revised:  Although the performance of the medium access control (MAC) of this protocol has been thoroughly investigated under the assumption of ideal wireless channel, there is still a lack of understanding of the crosslayer dynamics between MAC and physical layer in the presence of realistic wireless channel models that include path loss, multi-path fading , and shadowing.
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Original:  An investigation of these mutual effects is instrumental for consistent performance prediction, correct design and optimization of the protocols in the prospected application scenarios .
Revised:  An investigation of these mutual effects is instrumental for consistent performance prediction, correct design and optimization of the protocols .
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Original:  In this paper, a novel approach to analytical modeling of these interactions and performance prediction is proposed.
Revised:  In this paper, a novel approach to analytical modeling of these interactions is proposed.
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Original:  It is shown that performance indicators of the MAC over fading channels are often far from those derived under ideal channel assumptions.
Revised:  It is shown that the MAC performance indicators over fading channels are often far from those derived under ideal channel assumptions.
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Original:  It is shown that performance indicators of the MAC over fading channels are often far from those derived under ideal channel assumptions.
Revised:  It is shown that performance indicators of the MAC over fading channels can be far from those derived under ideal channel assumptions.
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Original:  Moreover, it is established to what extent  fading may be beneficial for the overall network performance and how the results presented in this paper can be used to drive joint optimization of physical layer and MAC layer parameters.
Revised:  As novel results, we show to what extent fading may be beneficial for the overall network performance and how the results presented in this paper can be used to drive joint optimization of physical layer and MAC layer parameters.
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Original:  Moreover, it is established to what extent  fading may be beneficial for the overall network performance and how the results presented in this paper can be used to drive joint optimization of physical layer and MAC layer parameters.
Revised:  Moreover, it is established to what extent the presence of fading may be beneficial for the overall network performance and how the results presented in this paper can be used to drive joint optimization of physical layer and MAC layer parameters.
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Original:  Moreover, it is established to what extent  fading may be beneficial for the overall network performance and how the results presented in this paper can be used to drive joint optimization of physical layer and MAC layer parameters.
Revised:  Moreover, it is established to what extent fading may be beneficial for the overall network performance and how the results presented in this paper can be used to drive joint selection of MAC and physical layer parameters.
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Original:  We verify that not only excitatory neuronal networks , but also networks of inhibitory neurons with fast synapses present power law avalanches.
Revised:  We verify that networks of excitatory by rebound neurons with fast synapses present power law avalanches.
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Original: We introduce a novel family of convex non-quadratic invariant functionals that we employ to derive regularized solutions of ill-posed linear inverse imaging problems.
Revised: We introduce a novel family of convex non-quadratic functionals that we employ to derive regularized solutions of ill-posed linear inverse imaging problems.
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Original:  This projection is performed efficiently based on a direct link we provide between vector projections onto \ell_q norm balls and matrix projections onto Schatten-matrix norm balls.
Revised:  This operation is performed efficiently based on a direct link we provide between vector projections onto \ell_q norm balls and matrix projections onto Schatten-matrix norm balls.
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Original:  This projection is performed efficiently based on a direct link we provide between vector projections onto \ell_q norm balls and matrix projections onto Schatten-matrix norm balls.
Revised:  This projection is performed efficiently based on a direct link we provide between vector projections onto \ell_q norm balls and matrix projections onto Schatten norm balls.
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