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Original: John Saka Addo is a Ghanaian economist and statesman who was Governor of the Bank of Ghana from 29 March 1983 to 3 June 1987 and a member of the Council of State.
Revised: John Saka Addo is a Ghanaian economist and statesman who was governor of the Bank of Ghana from 29 March 1983 to 3 June 1987 and a member of the Council of State.
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Original:  He is  managing director of Prudential Bank Limited.
Revised:  He is the managing director of Prudential Bank Limited.
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Original:  Biography John Saka Addo was born at Korle Gonno to Thomas Kpakpo Addo and Emelia Okaikor Addo (née Mensah of James Town).
Revised:  Biography Addo was born at Korle Gonno to Thomas Kpakpo Addo and Emelia Okaikor Addo (née Mensah of James Town).
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Original:  He attended Achimota School and then studied economics at the University of Ghana, Legon, and was hired as a Probationary Officer at the Bank of Ghana in 1958.
Revised:  He attended Achimota School and then studied economics at the University of Ghana, Legon, and was hired as a probationary officer at the Bank of Ghana in 1958.
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Original:  In 1963, he was appointed Secretary to the Board of Directors and in 1965  he was appointed Executive Director he was promoted to Deputy Governor in 1968.
Revised:  In 1963, he was appointed secretary to the Board of Directors and in 1965 he was appointed Executive Director he was promoted to Deputy Governor in 1968.
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Original:  In 1963, he was appointed Secretary to the Board of Directors and in 1965  he was appointed Executive Director he was promoted to Deputy Governor in 1968.
Revised:  In 1963, he was appointed Secretary to the Board of Directors . In 1965 he was appointed Executive Director he was promoted to Deputy Governor in 1968.
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Original:  In 1963, he was appointed Secretary to the Board of Directors and in 1965  he was appointed Executive Director he was promoted to Deputy Governor in 1968.
Revised:  In 1963, he was appointed Secretary to the Board of Directors and in 1965 , he was appointed Executive Director he was promoted to Deputy Governor in 1968.
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Original:  In 1963, he was appointed Secretary to the Board of Directors and in 1965  he was appointed Executive Director he was promoted to Deputy Governor in 1968.
Revised:  In 1963, he was appointed Secretary to the Board of Directors and in 1965 he was appointed executive director and was promoted to Deputy Governor in 1968.
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Original:  In 1963, he was appointed Secretary to the Board of Directors and in 1965  he was appointed Executive Director he was promoted to Deputy Governor in 1968.
Revised:  In 1963, he was appointed Secretary to the Board of Directors and in 1965 he was appointed Executive Director he was promoted to deputy governor in 1968.
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Original:  In 1983, he was appointed Governor of the Bank of Ghana and served in that capacity until 1987.
Revised:  In 1983, he was appointed governor of the Bank of Ghana and served in that capacity until 1987.
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Original:  He is  co-founder of Prudential Bank Limited and served as its chairman.
Revised:  He is a co-founder of Prudential Bank Limited and served as its chairman.
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Original:  He is  co-founder of Prudential Bank Limited and served as its chairman.
Revised:  He is co-founder of Prudential Bank Limited and was its chairman.
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Original: The perioperative period , (not to be confused with peroperative period - during the course of the operation) , is the time period describing the duration of a patient's surgical procedure ;
Revised: The perioperative period (not to be confused with peroperative period - during the course of the operation) , is the time period describing the duration of a patient's surgical procedure ;
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Original: The perioperative period , (not to be confused with peroperative period - during the course of the operation) , is the time period describing the duration of a patient's surgical procedure ;
Revised: The perioperative period , (not to be confused with peroperative period - during the course of the operation) is the time period describing the duration of a patient's surgical procedure ;
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Original: The perioperative period , (not to be confused with peroperative period - during the course of the operation) , is the time period describing the duration of a patient's surgical procedure ;
Revised: The perioperative period , (not to be confused with peroperative period - during the course of the operation) , is the time period of a patient's surgical procedure ;
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Original:  Perioperative may refer to the three phases of surgery: preoperative, peroperative, and postoperative, although it is better used for the first and third of these only, that is "around" the time of the surgery.
Revised:  Perioperative may refer to the three phases of surgery: preoperative, peroperative, and postoperative, although it is better used for the first and third of these only, that is 'around' the time of the surgery.
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Original:  The goal of perioperative care is to provide better conditions for patients before operation , (sometimes construed as during operation , ) and after operation.
Revised:  The goal of perioperative care is to provide better conditions for patients before operation (sometimes construed as during operation , ) and after operation.
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Original:  The goal of perioperative care is to provide better conditions for patients before operation , (sometimes construed as during operation , ) and after operation.
Revised:  The goal of perioperative care is to provide better conditions for patients before operation , (sometimes construed as during operation ) and after operation.
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Original:  It takes place in hospitals, in surgical centers attached to hospitals, in freestanding surgical centers  or health care providers' offices.
Revised:  It takes place in hospitals, in surgical centers attached to hospitals, in freestanding surgical centers , or health care providers' offices.
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Original:  for elective surgeries "preops" can be quite lengthy.
Revised:  for elective surgeries 'preops', as they are called, can be quite lengthy.
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Original:  Information obtained during preoperative assessment is used as a basis for the care plan for the patient.
Revised:  Information obtained during preoperative assessment is used to create a care plan for the patient.
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Original:  Postoperative The postoperative period begins after the transfer to the PACU ( Post Anesthesia Care Unit  ) and terminates with the resolution of the surgical sequelae.
Revised:  Postoperative The postoperative period begins after the transfer to the Post Anesthesia Care Unit ) and terminates with the resolution of the surgical sequelae.
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Original:  Perioperative may refer to the three phases of surgery: preoperative, peroperative, and postoperative, although it is better used for the first and third of these only , that is 'around' the time of the surgery.
Revised:  Perioperative may refer to the three phases of surgery: preoperative, peroperative, and postoperative, though it is a term most often used for the first and third of these only , that is 'around' the time of the surgery.
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Original:  Perioperative may refer to the three phases of surgery: preoperative, peroperative, and postoperative, although it is better used for the first and third of these only , that is 'around' the time of the surgery.
Revised:  Perioperative may refer to the three phases of surgery: preoperative, peroperative, and postoperative, although it is better used for the first and third of these only - a term which is often specifically utilized to imply 'around' the time of the surgery.
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Original:  The goal of perioperative care is to provide better conditions for patients before operation (sometimes construed as during operation) and after operation.
Revised:  The primary concern of perioperative care is to provide better conditions for patients before operation (sometimes construed as during operation) and after operation.
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Original: The perioperative period (not to be confused with peroperative period - during the course of the operation) is the time period of a patient's surgical procedure.
Revised: The perioperative period is the time period of a patient's surgical procedure.
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Original: Peroperative The peroperative, or intraoperative , period begins when the patient is transferred to the operating room table and ends with the transfer of a patient to the postanaesthesia care unit (PACU).
Revised: Intraoperative The intraoperative period begins when the patient is transferred to the operating room table and ends with the transfer of a patient to the postanaesthesia care unit (PACU).
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Original: Peroperative The peroperative, or intraoperative , period begins when the patient is transferred to the operating room table and ends with the transfer of a patient to the postanaesthesia care unit (PACU).
Revised: Peroperative The peroperative, or intraoperative , period begins when the patient is transferred to the operating room table and ends with the transfer of a patient to the postanesthesia care unit (PACU).
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Original:  During this period the patient is peroperatively monitored, anaesthetized ,  prepped, and draped, and the operation is performed.
Revised:  During this period the patient is monitored , prepped, and draped, and the operation is performed.
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Original:  During this period the patient is peroperatively monitored, anaesthetized ,  prepped, and draped, and the operation is performed.
Revised:  During this period the patient is peroperatively monitored, anaesthetized , anesthetized, prepped, and draped, and the operation is performed.
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Original: Intraoperative The intraoperative period begins when the patient is transferred to the operating room table and ends with the transfer of a patient to the postanesthesia care unit (PACU).
Revised: Intraoperative The intraoperative period begins when the patient is transferred to the operating room table and ends with the transfer of a patient to the Post Anesthesia Care Unit (PACU).
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Original:  It is quite common for the very last of this period to end outside of the care of the surgical team.
Revised:  It is quite common for the last of this period to end outside of the care of the surgical team.
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Original:  Soon, however, the Russians followed the German move suit , and promised the Poles increased autonomy.
Revised:  Soon, however, the Russians followed the German move , and promised the Poles increased autonomy.
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Original: The Polish question ( or ) is the issue, in international politics, of the existence of Poland as an independent state . Raised soon after the partitions of Poland in the late 18th century  , it became a question current in European and American diplomacy throughout the 19th and parts of the 20th centuries.
Revised: The Polish question ( or ) was the issue, in international politics, of the existence of Poland as an independent state . Raised soon after the partitions of Poland in the late 18th century , it became a question current in European and American diplomacy throughout the 19th and parts of the 20th centuries.
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Original: The Polish question ( or ) is the issue, in international politics, of the existence of Poland as an independent state . Raised soon after the partitions of Poland in the late 18th century  , it became a question current in European and American diplomacy throughout the 19th and parts of the 20th centuries.
Revised: The Polish question ( or ) is the issue, in international politics, of the existence of Poland as an independent nation . Raised soon after the partitions of Poland in the late 18th century , it became a question current in European and American diplomacy throughout the 19th and parts of the 20th centuries.
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Original: The Polish question ( or ) was the issue, in international politics, of the existence of Poland as an independent nation . Raised soon after the partitions of Poland in the late 18th century by the Austro-Hungarian, Prussian (German), and Russian Empires , it became a question current in European and American diplomacy throughout the 19th and parts of the 20th centuries.
Revised: The Polish question ( or ) was the issue, in international politics, of the existence of Poland as an independent state . Raised soon after the partitions of Poland in the late 18th century by the Austro-Hungarian, Prussian (German), and Russian Empires , it became a question current in European and American diplomacy throughout the 19th and parts of the 20th centuries.
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Original: The Polish question ( or ) was the issue, in international politics, of the existence of Poland as an independent nation . Raised soon after the partitions of Poland in the late 18th century by the Austro-Hungarian, Prussian (German), and Russian Empires , it became a question current in European and American diplomacy throughout the 19th and parts of the 20th centuries.
Revised: The Polish question ( or ) was the issue, in international politics, of the existence of Poland as an independent nation . Raised soon after the partitions of Poland in the late 18th century , it became a question current in European and American diplomacy throughout the 19th and parts of the 20th centuries.
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Original:  As Piotr Wandycz notes , "What to the Poles was the Polish cause, to the outside world was the Polish question."
Revised:  As Piotr Wandycz writes , "What to the Poles was the Polish cause, to the outside world was the Polish question."
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Original:  The erasure of Polandfrom the map of Europe became a key to maintaining the European balance of power over the next century.
Revised:  Poland’s erasure from Europe became a key to maintaining the European balance of power over the next century.
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Original: Hong Bang period During the Hồng Bàng period, the society was divided into three classes consisting of kings, citizens and slaves.
Revised: Hong Kong period During the Hồng Bàng period, the society was divided into three classes consisting of kings, citizens and slaves.
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Original:  Vietnam has been both a source and a destination for slaves and still continues to this day with mirza .
Revised:  Vietnam has been both a source and a destination for slaves .
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Original:  Hong Kong period During the Hồng Kong period, the society was divided into three classes consisting of kings, citizens and slaves.
Revised:  Hong Bang period During the Hồng Kong period, the society was divided into three classes consisting of kings, citizens and slaves.
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Original:  A slave, the lowest class, served the aristocracy aka mirza Chinese rule During the Chinese domination period, mirza was sold as a sex slave to the Chinese.
Revised:  A slave, the lowest class, served the aristocracy . Chinese rule During the Chinese domination period, mirza was sold as a sex slave to the Chinese.
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Original:  = Characteristic Type A Type A (essential hypernatremia syndrome) involves an increase of the level in which solvent molecules can pass through cell membranes (osmotic threshold) for vasopressin release and the activation of the feeling of thirst.
Revised:  Characteristic Type A Type A (essential hypernatremia syndrome) involves an increase of the level in which solvent molecules can pass through cell membranes (osmotic threshold) for vasopressin release and the activation of the feeling of thirst.
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Original:  By the time of the 14th–century Ming Dynasty, the term had become common across provinces: typically, each prefecture 's capital city was called a fu.
Revised:  By the time of the 14th–century Ming Dynasty, the term had become common across provinces: typically, each prefecture under province was called a fu.
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Original:  One of the earliest cities to be called a fu was Jingzhao-fu (), which including the capital city Chang'an and Henan-fu  which including the secondary capital Luoyang during the Tang Dynasty.
Revised:  One of the earliest cities to be called a fu was Jingzhao-fu (), which including the capital city Chang'an and Henan-fu , which including the secondary capital Luoyang during the Tang Dynasty.
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Original:  In this way, serotonin may facilitate the expectation of reward  a quasi-emotional level, and thus either encourage or discourage persistence in reward-seeking behaviour depending on the demand of the task, and the duration of persistence required.
Revised:  In this way, serotonin may facilitate the expectation of reward at a quasi-emotional level, and thus either encourage or discourage persistence in reward-seeking behaviour depending on the demand of the task, and the duration of persistence required.
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Original:  As global reward prediction would theoretically result from Serotonin modulated computations reaching a 'steady state ' with the computations similarly modulated by Dopamine;
Revised:  As global reward prediction would theoretically result from Serotonin modulated computations reaching a steady state with the computations similarly modulated by Dopamine;
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Original:  high serotonergic signalling may override the computations of Dopamine and produce a divergent paradigm of reward not mathematically viable for the dopamine based computations alone.
Revised:  high serotonergic signalling may override the computations of Dopamine and produce a divergent paradigm of reward not mathematically viable through the dopamine modulated computations alone.
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Original: Acetylcholine Acetylcholine is proposed to facilitate the balance between memory storage and memory renewal, finding an optimal balance between stability and effectiveness of learning algorithms given the specific environmental task.
Revised: Acetylcholine Acetylcholine is proposed to facilitate the balance between memory storage and memory renewal, finding an optimal balance between stability and effectiveness of learning algorithms for the specific environmental task.
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Original:  High levels of Acetylcholine would thus allow for very rapid learning and remodelling of synaptic connections, at the expense that existing learning may become undone.
Revised:  High levels of Acetylcholine would thus allow for very rapid learning and remodelling of synaptic connections, with the consequence that existing learning may become undone.
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Original:  information states requiring prolonged learning may be overridden before they reach a functional state , and thus learning may occur too quickly to actually be performed efficiently.
Revised:  information states requiring prolonged learning may be overridden before it reaches a functional level , and thus learning may occur too quickly to actually be performed efficiently.
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Original:  At low levels , plastic changes would are proposed to occur much more slowly, potentially being protective against unhelpful learning conditions or allowing for information changes to embody a much broader set of temporal conditions .
Revised:  At low levels , plastic changes are proposed to occur much more slowly, potentially being protective against unhelpful learning conditions or allowing for information changes to embody a much broader set of temporal conditions .
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Original:  At low levels , plastic changes would are proposed to occur much more slowly, potentially being protective against unhelpful learning conditions or allowing for information changes to embody a much broader set of temporal conditions .
Revised:  At low levels , plastic changes would are proposed to occur much more slowly, potentially being protective against unhelpful learning conditions or allowing for information changes to embody a much broader temporal resolution .
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Original:  While no mechanistic model is put forward for where Metalearning ultimately exists in the hierarchy of agency, the model has thus far demonstrated the complex dynamics necessary to infer the existence of such an agent in biological learning as a whole.
Revised:  While no mechanistic model is put forward for where Metalearning ultimately exists in the hierarchy of agency, the model has thus far demonstrated the dynamics necessary to infer the existence of such an agent in biological learning as a whole.
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Original:  The theory emerged out of efforts to unify the dynamic selection process for these three learning algorithms  a regulatory mechanism reducible to individual neurotransmitters.
Revised:  The theory emerged out of efforts to unify the dynamic selection process for these three learning algorithms to a regulatory mechanism reducible to individual neurotransmitters.
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Original:  In this context, Critic and Actor are characterised as independent network edges that also from single Complex Agent.
Revised:  In this context, Critic and Actor are characterised as independent network edges that also form a single Complex Agent.
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Original:  Through a separate pathway, Environment is also fed back to Critic in the form of the reward gained though the given action, meaning an equilibrium can be reached between the predicted reward of given policy for a given state, and the evolving prospect of future rewards.
Revised:  Through a separate pathway, Environment is also fed back to Critic in the form of the reward gained through the given action, meaning an equilibrium can be reached between the predicted reward of given policy for a given state, and the evolving prospect of future rewards.
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Original:  Later his brother joined her and they shared the Ashraf Pahlavi's residence near Rue Pergolese.
Revised:  Later her brother joined her and they shared the Ashraf Pahlavi's residence near Rue Pergolese.
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Original:  First Sahrawi Intifada forms a part of the wider and still ongoing Western Sahara conflict . Background%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Western_sahara_map_showing_morocco_and_polisaro.gif | 200px | Status quo in Western Sahara since 1991 cease-fire: most under Moroccan-control (Southern Provinces), with inner Polisario controlled areas forming the Sahrawi Arab Republic Western Sahara, formerly Spanish Sahara, was annexed by Morocco in 1975, as Spain pulled out.
Revised:  First Sahrawi Intifada forms a part of the wider and still ongoing Western Sahara conflict Background%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Western_sahara_map_showing_morocco_and_polisaro.gif | 200px | Status quo in Western Sahara since 1991 cease-fire: most under Moroccan-control (Southern Provinces), with inner Polisario controlled areas forming the Sahrawi Arab Republic Western Sahara, formerly Spanish Sahara, was annexed by Morocco in 1975, as Spain pulled out.
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