wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The obituary was discovered in the swine flu information update provided from the Department of Health every week .
Revised:  The obituary was discovered in the swine flu information update provided by the Department of Health every week .
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Original:  The obituary was discovered in the swine flu information update provided from the Department of Health every week .
Revised:  The obituary was discovered in the swine flu information update provided from the Department of Health weekly .
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Original:  Over the whole of 2009 total Chinese exports reached US $1.2 trillion, above Germany's $ 1.17 trillion.
Revised:  Over the whole of 2009 total Chinese exports reached US $1.2 trillion, above Germany's forecast $ 1.17 trillion.
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Original:  They’d put it into a big bucket, then share it out among ALL their artists - not the members whose songs we paid , all their artists, including rich and famous signed ones.
Revised:  They’d put it into a big bucket, then share it out among ALL their artists - not the members whose songs we played , all their artists, including rich and famous signed ones.
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Original:  If you think creating the world’s first radio station playing 100\% news music is expensive …. try being inaudible.
Revised:  If you think creating the world’s first radio station playing 100\% new music is expensive …. try being inaudible.
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Original:  Officials also ordered evacuation of two buildings in the vicinity when cracks were spotted on them, according to Capital FM Kenya  
Revised:  Officials also ordered evacuation of two buildings in the vicinity when cracks were spotted on them, according to Capital FM Kenya . 
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Original:  Benet's last two defeats came within two points each against Lockport Township High School and Whitefish Bay High School in Wisconsin   
Revised:  Benet's last two defeats came within two points each against Lockport Township High School and Whitefish Bay High School in Wisconsin . 
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Original:  Teammate Patrick Cox scored eight points and had five rebounds and three blocked shots  
Revised:  Teammate Patrick Cox scored eight points and had five rebounds and three blocked shots . 
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Original:  Previous violence by rebels has stopped Nigeria from using more than about two-thirds of its maximum pumping capacity of three million bpd, costing it about US$1 billion per month  
Revised:  Previous violence by rebels has stopped Nigeria from using more than about two-thirds of its maximum pumping capacity of three million bpd, costing it about US$1 billion per month . 
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Original:  Previous violence by rebels has stopped Nigeria from using more than about two-thirds of its maximum pumping capacity of three million bpd, costing it about US$1 billion per month  
Revised:  Previous violence by rebels has stopped Nigeria from using more than about two-thirds of its maximum pumping capacity of three million bpd, costing it about US$1 billion per month Related new
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Original: Senator Harry Reid Harry Reid, the  US Senate Majority leader who is a Democrat from Nevada , is under a lot of criticism over comments he made during the 2008 United States presidential election, toward US President Barack Obama.
Revised: Senator Harry Reid Harry Reid, the US Senate Majority leader , is under a lot of criticism over comments he made during the 2008 United States presidential election, toward US President Barack Obama.
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Original: The book Game Change to be published Jan. 11, also says that New York Senator Chuck Schumer encouraged Barack Obama to run in early 2006, even though he later endorsed his former colleague Hillary Clinton.
Revised: The book Game Change to be published January 11, also says that New York Senator Chuck Schumer encouraged Barack Obama to run in early 2006, even though he later endorsed his former colleague Hillary Clinton.
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Original:  The comments made by Reid included calling Obama a "light-skinned" black man "with no Negro dialect unless he wanted to have one."
Revised:  The highlighted comment made by Reid included calling Obama a "light-skinned" black man "with no Negro dialect unless he wanted to have one."
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Original:  The comments made by Reid included calling Obama a "light-skinned" black man "with no Negro dialect unless he wanted to have one."
Revised:  The comments made by Reid was calling Obama a "light-skinned" black man "with no Negro dialect unless he wanted to have one."
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Original:  Other revelations made were the possibilities that Bill Clinton may have been involved in a romantic affair, and that John McCain's aides were concerned about Sarah Palin's failure to understand basic facts prior to her ABC News interviews with Charles Gibson, including why North Korea and South Korea are separate countries.
Revised:  Other revelations included that John McCain's aides were concerned about Sarah Palin's failure to understand basic facts prior to her ABC News interviews with Charles Gibson, including why North Korea and South Korea are separate countries.
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Original:  CanadaCanadian journalist Michelle Lang was killed on December 30, also by a roadside bomb
Revised:  Canadian journalist Michelle Lang was killed on December 30, also by a roadside bomb
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Original:  Republican groups denounced the attack , saying that Sen. Clinton was merely making a partisan attack for political gain at a time when the nation should be focusing on national security issues.
Revised:  Republican groups denounced the comment , saying that Sen. Clinton was merely making a partisan attack for political gain at a time when the nation should be focusing on national security issues.
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Original:  The event was organized by the Aspen Institute , a think tank unaffiliated with any particular political party.
Revised:  The event was organized by the , a think tank unaffiliated with any particular political party.
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Original:  An Arizona field goal by Neil Rackers made it a 17-0 lead at the end of the first quarter  
Revised:  An Arizona field goal by Neil Rackers made it a 17-0 lead at the end of the first quarter . 
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Original:  At the end of the half, Green Bay kicked a field goal to cut into the deficit which was still quite large, a 31-10 halftime edge for Arizona  
Revised:  At the end of the half, Green Bay kicked a field goal to cut into the deficit which was still quite large, a 31-10 halftime edge for Arizona . 
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Original:  The game was won after Green Bay Aaron Rodgers fumbled the ball during overtime, resulting in Arizona's Carlos Dansby recovering the ball and returning it for a touchdown, giving the Cardinals the sudden death victory.
Revised:  The game was won after Green Bay Aaron Rodgers fumbled the ball during overtime, resulting in Arizona's Karlos Dansby recovering the ball and returning it for a touchdown, giving the Cardinals the sudden death victory.
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Original:  The match now had to be decided in overtime  
Revised:  The match now had to be decided in overtime . 
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Original:  On the Packers' third play, Aaron Rodgers fumbled, creating a Karlos Dansby recovery which he returned for a touch down, ending the offensive shootout with a final score of 51-48   
Revised:  On the Packers' third play, Aaron Rodgers fumbled, creating a Karlos Dansby recovery which he returned for a touch down, ending the offensive shootout with a final score of 51-48 . 
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Original:  After multiple attempts to fix the problem failed, the pilot decided that an emergency landing was the only remaining choice.
Revised:  After multiple attempts to fix the problem failed, the pilots decided that an emergency landing was the only remaining choice.
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Original:  However, the pilot decided that nothing could be done to bring the gear, an emergency landing was declared.
Revised:  However, the pilots decided that nothing could be done to bring the gear, an emergency landing was declared.
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Original:  "We are going to have an unusual landing," the pilot calmly announced to the 53 passengers seated on the plane, according to passenger Moritz Loew.
Revised:  "We are going to have an unusual landing," the pilots calmly announced to the 53 passengers seated on the plane, according to passenger Moritz Loew.
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Original:  Brace! Brace!”, the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passenger to enter the brace position as the plane made a rough touchdown on the runway at Newark.
Revised:  Brace! Brace!”, the pilots announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passenger to enter the brace position as the plane made a rough touchdown on the runway at Newark.
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Original:  Falk said he wanted to buy a bottle of Champagne to the currently unnamed pilot .
Revised:  Falk said he wanted to buy a bottle of Champagne to the currently unnamed pilots .
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Original:  Falk added, “The pilot did a beautiful job.
Revised:  Falk added, “The pilots did a beautiful job.
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Original:  He didn’t put it in the water like the other pilot did, but he should be commended.”
Revised:  He didn’t put it in the water like the other pilots did, but he should be commended.”
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Original:  Martin Trebino, a spokesperson for United Airlines said they would not release the  pilot's name on Sunday, but did not indicate when his name would be made available either.
Revised:  Martin Trebino, a spokesperson for United Airlines said they would not release the pilot's name on Sunday, but did not indicate when the names would be made available either.
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Original:  After multiple attempts to fix the problem failed, the pilots decided that an emergency landing was the only remaining choice.
Revised:  After multiple attempts to fix the problem failed, the pilot decided that an emergency landing was the only remaining choice.
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Original:  However, the pilots decided that nothing could be done to bring the gear, an emergency landing was declared.
Revised:  However, the pilot decided that nothing could be done to bring the gear, an emergency landing was declared.
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Original:  "We are going to have an unusual landing," the pilots calmly announced to the 53 passengers seated on the plane, according to passenger Moritz Loew.
Revised:  "We are going to have an unusual landing," the pilot calmly announced to the 53 passengers seated on the plane, according to passenger Moritz Loew.
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Original:  Brace! Brace!”, the pilots announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passenger to enter the brace position as the plane made a rough touchdown on the runway at Newark.
Revised:  Brace! Brace!”, the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passenger to enter the brace position as the plane made a rough touchdown on the runway at Newark.
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Original:  Falk said he wanted to buy a bottle of Champagne to the currently unnamed pilots . Falk added, “The pilots did a beautiful job.
Revised:  Falk said he wanted to buy a bottle of Champagne to the currently unnamed pilot . Falk added, “The pilots did a beautiful job.
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Original:  Falk said he wanted to buy a bottle of Champagne to the currently unnamed pilots . Falk added, “The pilots did a beautiful job.
Revised:  Falk said he wanted to buy a bottle of Champagne to the currently unnamed pilots . Falk added, “The pilot did a beautiful job.
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Original:  He didn’t put it in the water like the other pilots did, but he should be commended.”
Revised:  He didn’t put it in the water like the other pilot did, but he should be commended.”
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Original:  Martin Trebino, a spokesperson for United Airlines said they would not release the two pilot's name on Sunday, but did not indicate when the names would be made available either.
Revised:  Martin Trebino, a spokesperson for United Airlines said they would not release the pilot's name on Sunday, but did not indicate when the names would be made available either.
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Original:  Martin Trebino, a spokesperson for United Airlines said they would not release the two pilot's name on Sunday, but did not indicate when the names would be made available either.
Revised:  Martin Trebino, a spokesperson for United Airlines said they would not release the two pilot's name on Sunday, but did not indicate when his name would be made available either.
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Original: However, the pilot decided that nothing could be done to bring the gear  , an emergency landing was declared.
Revised: However, the pilot decided that nothing could be done to bring the gear down , an emergency landing was declared.
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Original:  Brace! Brace!", the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passenger to enter the brace position as the plane made a rough touchdown on the runway at Newark.
Revised:  Brace! Brace!", the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passengers to enter the brace position as the plane made a rough touchdown on the runway at Newark.
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Original:  Brace!", the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passengers to enter the brace position as the plane made a rough touchdown on the runway at Newark.
Revised:  Brace!", the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passengers to enter the brace position as the plane made a touchdown on the runway at Newark.
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Original:  They were then taken by bus to the airline's lounge were they told their stories to investigators and waited for their luggage.
Revised:  They were then taken by bus to the airline's lounge where they told their stories to investigators and waited for their luggage.
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Original:  Falk said he wanted to buy a bottle of Champagne to the currently unnamed pilot.
Revised:  Falk said he wanted to buy a bottle of champagne for the currently unnamed pilot.
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Original: Voters in French Guiana and Martinique have voted down referendums for increased autonomy from France earlier today, according to poll results.
Revised: Voters in French Guiana and Martinique voted down referendums for increased autonomy from France earlier today, according to poll results.
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Original:  Both Martinique, in the Caribbean, and French Guiana were granted French department status , when France relinquished total control more than half a century ago.
Revised:  Both Martinique, in the Caribbean, and French Guiana were granted French department status when France relinquished total control more than half a century ago.
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Original:   The great campaign of panic we have seen provided a golden opportunity for representatives from labs who knew they would hit the jackpot in the case of a pandemic being declared."
Revised:  " The great campaign of panic we have seen provided a golden opportunity for representatives from labs who knew they would hit the jackpot in the case of a pandemic being declared."
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Original: The drug company GlaxoSmithKlein responded to Wodarg's allegations.
Revised: The drug company GlaxoSmithKline responded to Wodarg's allegations.
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Original:  As WHO have stated, legal regulations and numerous safeguards are in place to manage possible conflicts of interest," it stated  
Revised:  As WHO have stated, legal regulations and numerous safeguards are in place to manage possible conflicts of interest," it stated . 
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Original:  McGwire had recently been hired as the Cardinal's hitting coach and was set to begin the job this season.
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Original:  There had been wide speculation about McGwire's use of performance-enhaning drugs, as he came from an era of baseball that has been dubbed the "steroid era" because of the high use of performance enhancing drugs throughout Major League Baseball   
Revised:  There had been wide speculation about McGwire's use of performance-enhaning drugs, as he came from an era of baseball that has been dubbed the "steroid era" because of the high use of performance enhancing drugs throughout Major League Baseball . 
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Original:  McGwire is now one of the six players in the top 15 home run hitters of all time that has either confessed to or been linked to the use of performance-enhancing drugs    
Revised:  McGwire is now one of the six players in the top 15 home run hitters of all time that has either confessed to or been linked to the use of performance-enhancing drugs . 
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Original:  McGwire is now one of the six players in the top 15 home run hitters of all time that has either confessed to or been linked to the use of performance-enhancing drugs    
Revised:  McGwire is now one of the six players in the top 15 home run hitters of all time that has either confessed to or been linked to the use of performance-enhancing drugs "I'm sure people will wonder if I could have hit all those home runs had I never taken steroids. I had good years when I didn't take any and I had bad years when I didn't take any. I had good years when I took steroids and I had bad years when I took steroids," said McGwire to the Associated Press. According to McGwire, the steroids were used for the enhancement of his play as well as to recover from the several injuries that he suffered between the 1990 and 1994 seasons. 
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Original:  McGwire is now one of the six players in the top 15 home run hitters of all time that has either confessed to or been linked to the use of performance-enhancing drugs    
Revised:  McGwire is now one of the six players in the top 15 home run hitters of all time that has either confessed to or been linked to the use of performance-enhancing drugs In the statement, he also commended the MLB Player's Association for attempting to remove steroids from the game. "Baseball is really different now— it's been cleaned up. The commissioner and the Player's Association implemented testing and they cracked down, and I'm glad they did," McGwire stated." Since he used the steroids before the current rules were in place, McGwire will likely not be disciplined by the league or the MLBPA
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Original:  Since he used the steroids before the current rules were in place, McGwire will likely not be disciplined by the league or the MLBPA   
Revised:  Since he used the steroids before the current rules were in place, McGwire will likely not be disciplined by the league or the MLBPA . 
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Original:   A public bus has crashed into a shop in Cardiff, Wales.
Revised:  Cardiff, Wales – A public bus has crashed into a shop in Cardiff, Wales.
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Original: The bus was nearly empty when it crashed into a closed, shuttered shop.
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Original:  The deal is effective immediately, and Palin will reportedly contribute regularly to all of the Fox stations.
Revised:  The deal is effective immediately, and Palin will reportedly contribute regularly to all Fox stations.
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Original:  He pleaded guilty to one of the two counts on November 30, 2009 
Revised:  He pleaded guilty to one of the two counts on November 30, 2009. 
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Original: Newly weds Emilio Menendez and Carlos Baturin German after the ceremony Emilio Menendez, a Spaniard, and Carlos Baturin German, an American, became the first gay couple to be married under a new law allowing same-sex marriage in Spain.
Revised:  Emilio Menendez, a Spaniard, and Carlos Baturin German, an American, became the first gay couple to be married under a new law allowing same-sex marriage in Spain.
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Original: Russian saxophone player (alto sax) of Armenian origin George Garanian has died this Monday in a hospital of Krasnodar where he planned some concerts together with Michel Legrand and a city big band.
Revised: Russian alto saxophone player of Armenian origin George Garanian has died this Monday in a hospital of Krasnodar where he planned some concerts together with Michel Legrand and a city big band.
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Original: According to CNN, the group executed British hostage Edwin Dyer in June, after failing to obtain the release of the person believed to be Osama bin Laden's deputy in Europe , Abu Qatada.
Revised: According to CNN, the group executed British hostage Edwin Dyer in June, after failing to obtain the release of the person believed to be Osama bin Laden's European deputy , Abu Qatada.
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Original:  The group also claims to have killed an American teacher in Mauritania in June for spreading Christianity
Revised:  The group also claims to have killed an American teacher in Mauritania in June for spreading the Christian message
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Original:  If their demands are not met  they have threatened to kill him.
Revised:  If their demands are not met , they have threatened to kill him.
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Original:  Four days later in neighbouring Mauritania the group kidnapped three Spanish aid workers.
Revised:  Four days later , in neighboring Mauritania, the group kidnapped three Spanish aid workers.
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Original: File:Cercle_of_Ménaka.png||Ménaka, Mali]]The African branch of al-Qaeda has demanded the release of four of its members held in Mali in exchange for the French hostage Pierre Camatte, 61 years, kidnapped in November.
Revised: File:Cercle_of_Ménaka.png||Ménaka, Mali]]The African branch of al-Qaida has demanded the release of four of its members held in Mali in exchange for the French hostage Pierre Camatte, 61 years, kidnapped in November.
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Original:  If their demands are not met , they have threatened to kill him.
Revised:  If their demands are not met they have threatened to kill him.
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Original:  Four days later , in neighboring Mauritania , the group kidnapped three Spanish aid workers.
Revised:  Four days later in neighbouring Mauritania the group kidnapped three Spanish aid workers.
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Original:  The states outgoing governor Jon Corzine said that he will sign the bill before he leaves office next week.
Revised:  The states outgoing Governor Jon Corzine said that he will sign the bill before he leaves office next week.
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Original:  The bill specifically bans the unlicensed growing of cannabis, driving under the influence of the drug, and only allows six licensed dispensaries in the state   
Revised:  The bill specifically bans the unlicensed growing of cannabis, driving under the influence of the drug, and only allows six licensed dispensaries in the state . 
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Original: Dried cannabis flowers New Jersey's state legislature has past a bill that will legalize medicinal marijuana for patients with chronic disease.
Revised: Dried cannabis flowers New Jersey's state legislature has passed a bill that will legalize medicinal marijuana for patients with chronic disease.
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Original:  The states outgoing GovernorJon Corzine said that he will sign the bill before he leaves office next week.
Revised:  The state's outgoing Governor, Jon Corzine, said that he will sign the bill before he leaves office next week.
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Original:  One of the supporters of the bill  Assemblyman Reed Gusciora said that “I truly believe this will become a model for other states because it balances the compassionate use of medical marijuana while limiting the number of ailments that a physician can prescribe it for,”.
Revised:  One of the supporters of the bill , Assemblyman Reed Gusciora said that “I truly believe this will become a model for other states because it balances the compassionate use of medical marijuana while limiting the number of ailments that a physician can prescribe it for,”.
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