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Original:  Unfortunately they were asked to leave their sacks before entering, but that was impossible since all the equipment that where needed for the live web show where in there.
Revised:  They were asked to leave their sacks before entering, but that was impossible since all the equipment that where needed for the live web show where in there.
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Original:  Unfortunately they were asked to leave their sacks before entering, but that was impossible since all the equipment that where needed for the live web show where in there.
Revised:  Unfortunately they were asked to leave their sacks before entering, but that was impossible since all the equipment that where needed for the live web show was in there.
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Original:  Since this was more secure and according to their viewers the robots were quite cute.
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Original:  Video of Performance Ballettikka RealVideo Internettika (2003) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This project was premiered in Moderna galerija Ljubljana – Slovene Museum of Contemporary arts & Television Slovenia Kultura – Lijubjana, Slovenia in December 2003.
Revised:  Video of performance Ballettikka RealVideo Internettika (2003) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This project was premiered in Moderna galerija Ljubljana – Slovene Museum of Contemporary arts & Television Slovenia Kultura – Lijubjana, Slovenia in December 2003.
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Original:  Video of Performance Ballettikka RealVideo Internettika (2003) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This project was premiered in Moderna galerija Ljubljana – Slovene Museum of Contemporary arts & Television Slovenia Kultura – Lijubjana, Slovenia in December 2003.
Revised:  Video of Performance Ballettikka RealVideo Internettika (2003) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The project was premiered in Moderna galerija Ljubljana – Slovene Museum of Contemporary arts & Television Slovenia Kultura – Lijubjana, Slovenia in December 2003.
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Original:  Video of Performance Ballettikka RealVideo Internettika (2003) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This project was premiered in Moderna galerija Ljubljana – Slovene Museum of Contemporary arts & Television Slovenia Kultura – Lijubjana, Slovenia in December 2003.
Revised:  Video of Performance Ballettikka RealVideo Internettika (2003) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This project was premiered in Moderna galerija Ljubljana – Slovene Museum of Contemporary arts & Television Slovenia Kultura – Lijubjana, Slovenia on December 2003.
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Original:  In this project Štromajer and Zorman have brought together two Moscow acts;
Revised:  Štromajer and Zorman have brought together two Moscow acts;
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Original:  In this project Štromajer and Zorman have brought together two Moscow acts;
Revised:  In this project Štromajer and Zorman brought together two Moscow acts;
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Original:  one was the Internet Ballet and more specifically their illegal invasion in Moscow’s Bolshoi Theatre and the second one was the Chechen terrorist act in the Dubrovka Theatre in October 2002.
Revised:  one was the Internet Ballet and their illegal invasion in Moscow’s Bolshoi Theatre and the second one was the Chechen terrorist act in the Dubrovka Theatre in October 2002.
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Original:  one was the Internet Ballet and more specifically their illegal invasion in Moscow’s Bolshoi Theatre and the second one was the Chechen terrorist act in the Dubrovka Theatre in October 2002.
Revised:  one was the Internet Ballet and more specifically their illegal invasion of Moscow’s Bolshoi Theatre and the second one was the Chechen terrorist act in the Dubrovka Theatre in October 2002.
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Original:  This project was located in Ljubljana Beltway - Motorway Ring in south Slovenia.
Revised:  The project was located in Ljubljana Beltway - Motorway Ring in south Slovenia.
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Original:  This project was located in Ljubljana Beltway - Motorway Ring in south Slovenia.
Revised:  This project was located on the Ljubljana Beltway - Motorway Ring in south Slovenia.
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Original:  The project in Ljubljana Beltway opened the doors for the following project in Italy. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video of Performance Balletikka Internettikka – Illigalikka Robottikka (2004) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On November 13, 2004 Igor Štromajer and Brane Zorman were ready to act out there next project.
Revised:  The project in Ljubljana Beltway opened the doors for the following project in Italy. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video of Performance Balletikka Internettikka – Illigalikka Robottikka (2004) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On November 13, 2004 Igor Štromajer and Brane Zorman were ready to act out the next project.
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Original:  Based on the previous project Ballettikka Internettikka – Auto Mobillikka they took it a step further were this time they made the robots perform in the kitchen of the famous Teatro Alla Scala were bio-food for artists is prepared.
Revised:  Based on the previous project Ballettikka Internettikka – Auto Mobillikka they took it a step further where this time they made the robots perform in the kitchen of the famous Teatro Alla Scala were bio-food for artists is prepared.
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Original:  Dancing an illegal wireless roboballet in the kitchen of the Teatro alla Scala symbolized a big conceptual and tactical challenge to the Intima Virtual Base, as a result the preparations have been taken seriously, safety procedures have been taken, and the previous experience from the Bolshoi Theatre in Moscow has been a great help.
Revised:  Dancing an illegal wireless roboballet in the kitchen of the Teatro alla Scala was a challenge to the Intima Virtual Base, as a result the preparations have been taken seriously, safety procedures have been taken, and the previous experience from the Bolshoi Theatre in Moscow has been a great help.
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Original:  Here is one description of the performance: Dancing a wireless people's internet ballet in Volksbühne Berlin represented a big conceptual and strategic challenge to the Intima Virtual Base and all the collaborators, therefore, the preparations were taken seriously, safety measures were calculated, and the previous experiences from the Bolshoi Theatre in Moscow, La Scala in Milan and The National Theatre in Belgrade were very welcome .
Revised:  Here is a description of the performance: Dancing a wireless people's internet ballet in Volksbühne Berlin represented a big conceptual and strategic challenge to the Intima Virtual Base and all the collaborators, therefore, the preparations were taken seriously, safety measures were calculated, and the previous experiences from the Bolshoi Theatre in Moscow, La Scala in Milan and The National Theatre in Belgrade were very welcome .
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Original:  Here is one description of the performance: Dancing a wireless people's internet ballet in Volksbühne Berlin represented a big conceptual and strategic challenge to the Intima Virtual Base and all the collaborators, therefore, the preparations were taken seriously, safety measures were calculated, and the previous experiences from the Bolshoi Theatre in Moscow, La Scala in Milan and The National Theatre in Belgrade were very welcome .
Revised:  Here is one description of the performance: Dancing a wireless people's internet ballet in Volksbühne Berlin represented a challenge to the Intima Virtual Base and all the collaborators, therefore, the preparations were taken seriously, safety measures were calculated, and the previous experiences from the Bolshoi Theatre in Moscow, La Scala in Milan and The National Theatre in Belgrade were very welcome .
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Original:  Here is one description of the performance: Dancing a wireless people's internet ballet in Volksbühne Berlin represented a big conceptual and strategic challenge to the Intima Virtual Base and all the collaborators, therefore, the preparations were taken seriously, safety measures were calculated, and the previous experiences from the Bolshoi Theatre in Moscow, La Scala in Milan and The National Theatre in Belgrade were very welcome .
Revised:  Here is one description of the performance: Dancing a wireless people's internet ballet in Volksbühne Berlin represented a big conceptual and strategic challenge to the Intima Virtual Base and all the collaborators, therefore, the preparations were taken seriously, safety measures were calculated, and the previous experiences from the Bolshoi Theatre in Moscow, La Scala in Milan and The National Theatre in Belgrade were used .
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Original:  This project was supported by The Ministry of Culture of the Republic of Slovenia. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video of Performance Ballettikka Internettikka: RenminNetBallet (2007) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% RenminNetBallet is an re-enactment/remake/reinterpretation of the VolksNetBallet guerrilla net ballet action (Berlin 2006) and was performed as a part of the Microwave Festival -
Revised:  The project was supported by The Ministry of Culture of the Republic of Slovenia. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video of Performance Ballettikka Internettikka: RenminNetBallet (2007) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% RenminNetBallet is an re-enactment/remake/reinterpretation of the VolksNetBallet guerrilla net ballet action (Berlin 2006) and was performed as a part of the Microwave Festival -
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Original:  The artists have been using a Mac Book Pro laptop computer and low-technology mobile and wireless equipment: Mini DV cam, MP3 players, remote controlled toy-robot etc.
Revised:  The artists used a Mac Book Pro laptop computer and low-technology mobile and wireless equipment: Mini DV cam, MP3 players, remote controlled toy-robot etc.
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Original:  Dancing people's internet ballet in a Hong Kong City Hall toilet room for disabled persons represented a big conceptual and strategic challenge, therefore, the preparations have been taken seriously and safety measures have been calculated.
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Original:  Performative Installation in Hellerau, Dresden, broadcasting live from the roof of the targeted skyscraper in Hong Kong (Lippo Centre 2), in front of the dense cityscape, using a sad and lonely commercial Silverlit R/C Robot Program-a-BOT, dancing an Almost Static But Still Transitive Net Ballet for 30 minutes in an apparently stagnant Hong Kong dawn.
Revised:  Performative Installation in Hellerau, Dresden, broadcasting live from the roof of the targeted skyscraper in Hong Kong (Lippo Centre 2), in front of the dense cityscape, using a commercial Silverlit R/C Robot Program-a-BOT, dancing an Almost Static But Still Transitive Net Ballet for 30 minutes in an apparently stagnant Hong Kong dawn.
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Original:  Performative Installation in Hellerau, Dresden, broadcasting live from the roof of the targeted skyscraper in Hong Kong (Lippo Centre 2), in front of the dense cityscape, using a sad and lonely commercial Silverlit R/C Robot Program-a-BOT, dancing an Almost Static But Still Transitive Net Ballet for 30 minutes in an apparently stagnant Hong Kong dawn.
Revised:  Performative Installation in Hellerau, Dresden, broadcasting live from the roof of the targeted skyscraper in Hong Kong (Lippo Centre 2), in front of the dense cityscape, using a sad and lonely commercial Silverlit R/C Robot Program-a-BOT, dancing an Almost Static But Still Transitive Net Ballet for 30 minutes in the Hong Kong dawn.
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Original:  It is reported that Igor said people were asking when the performance was going to start, to which he had to reply ‘It already has’.
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Original:  Video of Performance Ballettikka Internettikka: Olymppikka (2008) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This took place on Monday 24 March 2008.
Revised:  Video of Performance Ballettikka Internettikka: Olymppikka (2008) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% It took place on Monday 24 March 2008.
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Original:  This was done to symbolise love and togetherness. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video of Performance Ballettikka Internettikka: Intermenttikka (2008) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Intermenttikka was performed as part of the Digital Playground 2008, secretly broadcasting live from the target construction site in Seoul, performing a robotic mortal ballet right after the sunrise.
Revised:  This was done to symbolise love and togetherness. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Video of Performance Ballettikka Internettikka: Intermenttikka (2008) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Intermenttikka was performed as part of the Digital Playground 2008, secretly broadcasting live from the target construction site in Seoul, performing a robotic ballet after sunrise.
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Original:  It consisted of a Live Internet Broadcast from Seoul, Korea on Tuesday 22 July 2008 at 6 AM Korean Time (GMT/UTC+9) The artists grouted the sad and lonely commercial Silverlit R/C toy-robot with cement and placed it into reinforced ferroconcrete foundations of the target construction site (the rising Dongdaemun (Great East Gate) / Tongdaemun Market), to stay there forever.
Revised:  It consisted of a Live Internet Broadcast from Seoul, Korea on Tuesday 22 July 2008 at 6 AM Korean Time (GMT/UTC+9) . The artists covered the commercial Silverlit R/C toy-robot with cement and placed it into reinforced ferroconcrete foundations of the target construction site (the rising Dongdaemun (Great East Gate) / Tongdaemun Market), to stay there forever.
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Original:  The interment robot was equipped with powerful QSTARZ BT-Q818 extreme GPS transmitter which was broadcasting the signal until the transmitter run out of batteries.
Revised:  The internment robot was equipped with powerful QSTARZ BT-Q818 extreme GPS transmitter which was broadcasting the signal until the transmitter run out of batteries.
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Original:  The interment robot was equipped with powerful QSTARZ BT-Q818 extreme GPS transmitter which was broadcasting the signal until the transmitter run out of batteries.
Revised:  The interment robot was equipped with a QSTARZ BT-Q818 extreme GPS transmitter which was broadcasting the signal until the transmitter run out of batteries.
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Original:  Norddikka (2008) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Norddikka was a live Internet Broadcast from Svalbard, Arctic Ocean on Wednesday 31 December 2008 at 23:55 PM Central European Time (GMT/UTC+1) Svalbard is an archipelago (a chain or cluster of islands) in the Arctic Ocean north of mainland Europe, about midway between mainland Norway and the North Pole, and forms the northernmost part of Norway and the northernmost lands of Europe.
Revised:  Norddikka (2008) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Norddikka was a live Internet Broadcast from Svalbard, Arctic Ocean on Wednesday 31 December 2008 at 23:55 PM Central European Time (GMT/UTC+1) . 0Svalbard is a cluster of islands) in the Arctic Ocean north of mainland Europe, about midway between mainland Norway and the North Pole, and forms the northernmost part of Norway and the northernmost lands of Europe.
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Original:  Stromajer and Zorman conducted and monitored the complex operation of leaving the robot in the deep snow of the white spaciousness of the Arctic glacier (Olav V Land, Svalbard) on New Year's Eve.
Revised:  Stromajer and Zorman conducted and monitored the leaving of the robot in the deep snow of the white spaciousness of the Arctic glacier (Olav V Land, Svalbard) on New Year's Eve.
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Original:  opened in July 2008 in collaboration with the Norwegian Polar Institute, as one of the twelve international permanent research bases in Svalbard), executed the intimate act of jilting the robot on the glacier.
Revised:  opened in July 2008 in collaboration with the Norwegian Polar Institute, as one of the twelve international permanent research bases in Svalbard), abandoned the robot on the glacier.
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Original:  Exactly at midnight (Central European Time/also local Svalbard time), when the year 2008 turned into 2009, they reached Point Zero (78N, 17E) and prepared a platform for the robot, using a small snow shovel.
Revised:  Exactly at midnight (Central European Time/also local Svalbard time), when the year 2008 turned into 2009, they reached Point Zero (78N, 17E) and prepared a platform for the robot, using a snow shovel.
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Original:  Video of Performance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ballettikka Internettikka: Nipponnikka (2009) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nipponnikka was done on the Japanese island of Minami Torishima on 23 November 2009, at sunrise and was yet another Live Internet Broadcast %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%%  Stromajer and Zorman conducted another intimate act of jilting two robots in the Pacific Ocean.
Revised:  Video of Performance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ballettikka Internettikka: Nipponnikka (2009) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nipponnikka was done on the Japanese island of Minami Torishima on 23 November 2009, at sunrise and was a Live Internet Broadcast %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Stromajer and Zorman conducted another intimate act of jilting two robots in the Pacific Ocean.
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Original:  Video of Performance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ballettikka Internettikka: Nipponnikka (2009) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nipponnikka was done on the Japanese island of Minami Torishima on 23 November 2009, at sunrise and was yet another Live Internet Broadcast %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%%  Stromajer and Zorman conducted another intimate act of jilting two robots in the Pacific Ocean.
Revised:  Video of Performance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ballettikka Internettikka: Nipponnikka (2009) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nipponnikka was done on the Japanese island of Minami Torishima on 23 November 2009, at sunrise and was yet another Live Internet Broadcast %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% . Stromajer and Zorman conducted another intimate act of jilting two robots in the Pacific Ocean.
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Original:  Video of Performance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ballettikka Internettikka: Nipponnikka (2009) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nipponnikka was done on the Japanese island of Minami Torishima on 23 November 2009, at sunrise and was yet another Live Internet Broadcast %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%%  Stromajer and Zorman conducted another intimate act of jilting two robots in the Pacific Ocean.
Revised:  Video of Performance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ballettikka Internettikka: Nipponnikka (2009) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nipponnikka was done on the Japanese island of Minami Torishima on 23 November 2009, at sunrise and was yet another Live Internet Broadcast %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Stromajer and Zorman abandoned two robots in the Pacific Ocean.
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Original:  Štromajer and Zorman therefore jilted two of their favourite Silverlit R/C Program-a-BOT robots (€36 in retail) in the loneliness of the Pacific Ocean, at the easternmost point of Japan, the Land of the Rising Sun—two suns, one for each robot!
Revised:  Štromajer and Zorman therefore abandoned two of their favourite Silverlit R/C Program-a-BOT robots (€36 in retail) in the loneliness of the Pacific Ocean, at the easternmost point of Japan, the Land of the Rising Sun—two suns, one for each robot!
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Original:  Štromajer and Zorman therefore jilted two of their favourite Silverlit R/C Program-a-BOT robots (€36 in retail) in the loneliness of the Pacific Ocean, at the easternmost point of Japan, the Land of the Rising Sun—two suns, one for each robot!
Revised:  Štromajer and Zorman therefore jilted two of their Silverlit R/C Program-a-BOT robots (€36 in retail) in the loneliness of the Pacific Ocean, at the easternmost point of Japan, the Land of the Rising Sun—two suns, one for each robot!
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Original:  Video of Performance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Future of Ballettikka Internettikka (2009 - Present) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Igor wants to complete one more project with the robots before abandoning them .
Revised:  Video of Performance %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Future of Ballettikka Internettikka (2009 - Present) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Igor wants to complete one more project with the robots .
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Original:  He plans on travelling to Antarctica to jilt another robot.
Revised:  He plans on travelling to Antarctica to abandon another robot.
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Original:  External links Intima Virtual Base Website
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Original: The internment robot was equipped with a QSTARZ BT-Q818 extreme GPS transmitter which was broadcasting the signal until the transmitter run out of batteries.
Revised: The interred robot was equipped with a QSTARZ BT-Q818 extreme GPS transmitter which was broadcasting the signal until the transmitter run out of batteries.
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Original:  Advantages of cluster randomised controlled trials over individually randomised controlled trials include the  ability to study interventions that cannot be directed toward selected individuals (e.g., a radio show about lifestyle changes) and the ability to control for "contamination" across individuals (e.g., one individual's changing behaviors may influence another individual to do so).
Revised:  Advantages of cluster randomised controlled trials over individually randomised controlled trials include : ability to study interventions that cannot be directed toward selected individuals (e.g., a radio show about lifestyle changes) and the ability to control for "contamination" across individuals (e.g., one individual's changing behaviors may influence another individual to do so).
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Original:  Advantages of cluster randomised controlled trials over individually randomised controlled trials include the  ability to study interventions that cannot be directed toward selected individuals (e.g., a radio show about lifestyle changes) and the ability to control for "contamination" across individuals (e.g., one individual's changing behaviors may influence another individual to do so).
Revised:  Advantages of cluster randomised controlled trials over individually randomised controlled trials include the The ability to study interventions that cannot be directed toward selected individuals (e.g., a radio show about lifestyle changes) and the ability to control for "contamination" across individuals (e.g., one individual's changing behaviors may influence another individual to do so).
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Original:  Another benefit can be reduced cost in running a survey.
Revised:  Reduced cost in running a survey.
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Original:  For example, when wanting to survey households, it could often be cheaper to choose street blocks and survey all the houses there in order to reduce the cost of traveling for the people conducting the surveySampling People, Networks and Records coursers course (worth finding a better reference) .
Revised:  For example, when wanting to survey households, it could often be cheaper to choose street blocks and survey all the houses there in order to reduce the cost of traveling for the people conducting the survey.Sampling People, Networks and Records coursers course (worth finding a better reference) .
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Original:   Advantages of cluster randomised controlled trials over individually randomised controlled trials include: Disadvantages  compared with individually randomised controlled trials include greater complexity in design and analysis, and a requirement for more participants to obtain the same statistical power.
Revised:  Advantages Advantages of cluster randomised controlled trials over individually randomised controlled trials include: Disadvantages compared with individually randomised controlled trials include greater complexity in design and analysis, and a requirement for more participants to obtain the same statistical power.
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