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Original:  Yesterday, economists warned one of the impacts of Katrina on the US economy would be reducing a number of jobs by  400,000.
Revised:  Yesterday, economists warned one of the impacts of Katrina on the US economy would be reducing a number of jobs by up to 400,000.
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Original:  They also said the country's GDP in the second half of 2005 could be less by 1\% than expected, because of the surge in oil prices
Revised:  They also said the country's GDP in the second half of 2005 could be 1\% than expected, because of the surge in oil prices
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Original:  They also said the country's GDP in the second half of 2005 could be less by 1\% than expected, because of the surge in oil prices
Revised:  They also said the country's GDP in the second half of 2005 could be less by 1\% less than expected because of the surge in oil prices
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Original:  (July 12, 2005)]] Crude oil prices fell by $0.32, to $63.95 a barrel, after a report showed less than expected losses in oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina.
Revised:  (July 12, 2005)]] Crude oil prices fell by $0.32, to $63.95 a barrel, after a report showed lower than expected losses in oil supplies due to Hurricane Katrina.
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Original:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production  in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, but the day after the storm , 97\% of production was offline .
Revised:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production capacity in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, but the day after the storm , 97\% of production was offline .
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Original:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production  in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, but the day after the storm , 97\% of production was offline .
Revised:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, versus 97\% the day after the storm , 97\% of production was offline .
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Original:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production  in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, but the day after the storm , 97\% of production was offline .
Revised:  The department also announced that 57\% of the production in the Gulf of Mexico is still down, but the day after the storm .
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Original:  Yesterday, economists warned  one of the impacts of Katrina on the U.S. economy would be a reduction in numbers of jobs by up to 400,000.
Revised:  Yesterday, economists warned taht one of the impacts of Katrina on the U.S. economy would be a reduction in numbers of jobs by up to 400,000.
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Original:  Yesterday, economists warned  one of the impacts of Katrina on the U.S. economy would be a reduction in numbers of jobs by up to 400,000.
Revised:  Yesterday, economists warned one of the impacts of Katrina on the US economy would be a reduction in numbers of jobs by up to 400,000.
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Original:  Yesterday, economists warned  one of the impacts of Katrina on the U.S. economy would be a reduction in numbers of jobs by up to 400,000.
Revised:  Yesterday, economists warned one of the impacts of Katrina on the U.S. economy would be a reduction in the number of jobs by up to 400,000.
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Original:  They also said the country's GDP  in the second half of 2005  could be 1\% less than expected because of the surge in oil prices
Revised:  They also said the country's GDP , in the second half of 2005 could be 1\% less than expected because of the surge in oil prices
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Original:  They also said the country's GDP  in the second half of 2005  could be 1\% less than expected because of the surge in oil prices
Revised:  They also said the country's GDP in the second half of 2005 , could be 1\% less than expected because of the surge in oil prices
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Original:  They also said the country's GDP  in the second half of 2005  could be 1\% less than expected because of the surge in oil prices
Revised:  They also said the country's GDP in the second half of 2005 could be 1\% less than expected , due to the surge in oil prices
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Original: Yesterday, economists warned taht one of the impacts of Katrina on the US economy would be a reduction in the number of jobs by up to 400,000.
Revised: Yesterday, economists warned that one of the impacts of Katrina on the US economy would be a reduction in the number of jobs by up to 400,000.
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Original:  They also said the country's GDP, in the second half of 2005, could be 1\% less than expected, due to the surge in oil prices  
Revised:  They also said the country's GDP, in the second half of 2005, could be 1\% less than expected, due to the surge in oil prices . 
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Original:  Bow Wow’s “Let Me Hold You” featuring Omarion falls 5-9 and Lifehouse’s “You and Me” rounds out the top-10 with a two position dip
Revised:  Bow Wow’s “Let Me Hold You” featuring Omarion fell 5-9 and Lifehouse’s “You and Me” rounds out the top-10 with a two position dip
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Original:  Bow Wow’s “Let Me Hold You” featuring Omarion falls 5-9 and Lifehouse’s “You and Me” rounds out the top-10 with a two position dip
Revised:  Bow Wow’s “Let Me Hold You” featuring Omarion falls 5-9 and Lifehouse’s “You and Me” rounded out the top-10 with a two position dip
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Original: September 8, 2005 An airstrike by coalition aircraft destroyed a house in the city of al-Jaramil, in western Iraq.
Revised:  An airstrike by coalition aircraft destroyed a house in the city of al-Jaramil, in western Iraq.
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Original:  Secondary explosions were reported by observing coalition soldiers, indicating that the house also contained a cache of weapon 
Revised:  Secondary explosions were reported by observing coalition soldiers, indicating that the house also contained a cache of weapons. 
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Original: Its believed that he brought the foreign fighters into Iraq, where they were dispatched to various terror groups operating in the country and carried out attacks against Iraqi civilians, Iraqi Security Forces and Coalition forces.
Revised: It's believed that he brought the foreign fighters into Iraq, where they were dispatched to various terror groups operating in the country and carried out attacks against Iraqi civilians, Iraqi Security Forces and Coalition forces.
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Original: Its believed that he brought the foreign fighters into Iraq, where they were dispatched to various terror groups operating in the country and carried out attacks against Iraqi civilians, Iraqi Security Forces and Coalition forces.
Revised: Its believed that he brought the foreign fighters into Iraq, where they were dispatched to various insurgent groups operating in the country and carried out attacks against Iraqi civilians, Iraqi Security Forces and Coalition forces.
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Original:  Secondary explosions were reported by observing coalition soldiers, indicating that the house also contained a cache of weapons      .
Revised:  Secondary explosions were reported by observing coalition soldiers, indicating that the house also contained a cache of weapons . .
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Original:  A man, identified as Abu Ali and believed by coalition forces officials to be a foreign fighter facilitator was  killed in the attack.
Revised:  A man, identified as Abu Ali and believed by coalition forces officials to be a foreign fighter facilitator was believed to have been killed in the attack.
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Original: An airstrike by coalition aircraft destroyed a house in the city of al-Jaramil, in western Iraq.
Revised: An air strike by coalition aircraft destroyed a house in the city of al-Jaramil, in western Iraq.
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Original:  He was also said have  links to Syria and Saudi Arabia, where he reportedly recruited most of his foreign fighters.
Revised:  He was also said have had links to Syria and Saudi Arabia, where he reportedly recruited most of his foreign fighters.
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Original:  An improvised explosive device also detonated early Wensday at 8:30 a.m. (430 GMT), killing four American private security contractors, when their vehicle, the part of an American diplomatic convoy, struck the explosive device in Southern Basra, as they crossed the foot of the Ghazyza bridge, according to an official . A U.S. Army humvee, belonging to the 3rd Infantry Division also struck an IED Wensday on the Mohammed al-Qasim highway in eastern Baghdad.
Revised:  An improvised explosive device also detonated early Wensday at 8:30 a.m. (430 GMT), killing four American private security contractors, when their vehicle, the part of an American diplomatic convoy, struck the explosive device in Southern Basra, as they crossed the foot of the Ghazyza bridge, according to an official A U.S. Army humvee, belonging to the 3rd Infantry Division also struck an IED Wensday on the Mohammed al-Qasim highway in eastern Baghdad.
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Original:  When asked about mandatory evacuations, New Orleans Police Superintendent Eddie Compass, while reaffirming the official word, qualified his statement stating that every reasonable means would be used to logically convince a person that it is in his best interst to evacuate.
Revised:  When asked about mandatory evacuations, New Orleans Police Superintendent Eddie Compass, while reaffirming the official word, qualified his statement stating that every reasonable means would be used to logically convince a person that it is in his best interest to evacuate.
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Original:  The contractor expects one span to be repaired and opened for traffic wihin forty-five days
Revised:  The contractor expects one span to be repaired and opened for traffic within forty-five days
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Original:  Parish President Arron Broussard and Councillor Jennifer Sneed stated that residents should be allowed to return as soon as possible so repairs and rebuilding may begin.
Revised:  Parish President Arron Broussard and Councilor Jennifer Sneed stated that residents should be allowed to return as soon as possible so repairs and rebuilding may begin.
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Original:  25,000 body bags have been prepared in advance, for the event that the death toll from Katrina is that high.
Revised:  25,000 body bags have been prepared in advance, in the event that the death toll from Katrina is that high.
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Original: Residents of Jefferson Parish, and the upper portions of Saint Bernard Parish will be allowed to permanently return to their homes starting on Monday.
Revised: Residents of Jefferson Parish, and the upper portions of Saint Bernard Parish will be allowed to return permanently to their homes starting on Monday.
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Original:  In other news  companies are working with Federal Emergency Management Agency to provide money and support to the victims of Katrina, in order to ease them into a new life.
Revised:  In other news , companies are working with Federal Emergency Management Agency to provide money and support to the victims of Katrina, in order to ease them into a new life.
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Original:  In addition, a contract in the amount of approximately thirty-three million dollars has been let to repair the I-10 span crossing the eastern portion of Lake Pontchartrain  .
Revised:  In addition, a contract for approximately thirty-three million dollars has been let to repair the I-10 span crossing the eastern portion of Lake Pontchartrain .
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Original:  In addition, a contract in the amount of approximately thirty-three million dollars has been let to repair the I-10 span crossing the eastern portion of Lake Pontchartrain  .
Revised:  In addition, a contract in the amount of approximately thirty-three million dollars to repair the I-10 span crossing the eastern portion of Lake Pontchartrain .
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Original:  Many of the bridge sections, especially on the eastern-facing span, were knocked off their pilings as hurricane Katrina passed near the city.
Revised:  Many of the bridge sections, especially on the eastern-facing span, were knocked off their pilings as hurricane Katrina passed close to the city.
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Original:  Temporary warehouses are being set up around the city to deal with corpse storage.
Revised:  Temporary ware houses are being set up around the city to deal with corpse storage.
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Original:  Temporary ware houses are being set up around the city to deal with corpse storage.
Revised:  Temporary warehouses are being set up around the city to deal with corpse storage.
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Original:  Dr. Julie Gerberding, head of the US Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC), said "If you haven't left the city yet, you must do so," and stated that anyone who comes in contact with the nearly toxic water must immediately wash themselves with clean water.
Revised:  Dr. Julie Gerberding, head of the US Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC), said "If you haven't left the city yet, you must do so," and stated that anyone who comes in contact with the toxic water must immediately wash themselves with clean water.
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Original:  In other news, companies are working with the US Federal Emergency Management Agency to provide money and support to the victims of Katrina, in order to ease them into a new life.
Revised:  Companies are working with the US Federal Emergency Management Agency to provide money and support to the victims of Katrina, in order to ease them into a new life.
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Original:  From now on Tajikistan will protect the border unaided, " deputy head of the Russian Border Service Lt.
Revised:  " deputy head of the Russian Border Service Lt.
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Original:  " Russian border guards have been controlling the Tajik-Afghan border since 1993 under an intergovernmental agreement.
Revised:  Russian border guards have been controlling the Tajik-Afghan border since 1993 under an intergovernmental agreement.
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Original:  Meanwhile, as the entire border between Tajikistan and Afghanistanhas been returned to Tajikistan's jurisdiction, "a group of expert Russian border-guard officers will be attached to top officials of the Tajik State Border Committee as of next week," chief of the border command Major-General Nikolai Kasharin said.
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Original:  According to him, "(Russian) officers of the operative group will give consultations to their Tajik counterparts on ...efficient border protection and operations to prevent smugglingof arms and drugs from Afghanistan.
Revised:  Tajikistan is a prime route for illegal drugs from Afghanistan, which is the world's top opium producer. The transport of arms are also high on the list of priorities
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Original: Tajikistan will now protect their border unaided by Russia, as Pyandzh unit border guards leave from the area.
Revised: Tajikistan will now protect their border unaided by Russia, as Pyandzh unit border guards leave the area.
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Original:  This week, expert Russian border guard officers and tactitions have met with the Tajik State Border Committee, in order to assist in the turnover, according to chief of the border command Major-General Nikolai Kasharin.
Revised:  This week, expert Russian border guard officers and tacticians have met with the Tajik State Border Committee, in order to assist in the turnover, according to chief of the border command Major-General Nikolai Kasharin.
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Original:  The transport of arms are also high on the list of  priorities
Revised:  The transport of arms are both high on the list of priorities
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Original:  The timetable changes have been justified by CityRail and the State Government as being necessary to improve safety and reliability.
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Original: CityRail operates train services in Sydney There were angry scenes today at Harris Park train station in Sydney's western suburbs when the 9:12 train to the City stopped on the platform but didn't open its doors.
Revised: CityRail operates train services in Sydney There were angry scenes today at Harris Park train station in Sydney's western suburbs when the 9:12 train to the city stopped on the platform but didn't open its doors.
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Original: CityRail operates train services in Sydney  There were angry scenes today at Harris Park train station in Sydney's western suburbs when the 9:12 train to the city stopped on the platform but didn't open its doors.
Revised: CityRail operates train services in Sydney Sydney, Australia: There were angry scenes today at Harris Park train station in Sydney's western suburbs when the 9:12 train to the city stopped on the platform but didn't open its doors.
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Original: CityRail operates train services in Sydney There were angry scenes today at Harris Park train station in the western suburbs of Sydney, Australia, when the 9: 12 train to the city stopped on the platform but didn't open its doors.
Revised: CityRail operates train services in Sydney There were angry scenes , today, at Harris Park train station in the western suburbs of Sydney, Australia, when the 9: 12 train to the city stopped on the platform but didn't open its doors.
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Original: CityRail operates train services in Sydney There were angry scenes today at Harris Park train station in the western suburbs of Sydney, Australia, when the 9: 12 train to the city stopped on the platform but didn't open its doors.
Revised: CityRail operates train services in Sydney There were angry scenes today at Harris Park train station in the western suburbs of Sydney, Australia, when the 9: 12 train to the city stopped at the platform but didn't open its doors.
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Original:  The station attendant arranged for one of the Western Line express services to stop at Harris Park, which satisfied commuters who  by this time  had started to demand their money back ;
Revised:  The station attendant arranged for one of the Western Line express services to stop at Harris Park, which satisfied commuters who , by this time had started to demand their money back ;
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Original:  The station attendant arranged for one of the Western Line express services to stop at Harris Park, which satisfied commuters who  by this time  had started to demand their money back ;
Revised:  The station attendant arranged for one of the Western Line express services to stop at Harris Park, which satisfied commuters who by this time , had started to demand their money back ;
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Original:  The station attendant arranged for one of the Western Line express services to stop at Harris Park, which satisfied commuters who  by this time  had started to demand their money back ;
Revised:  The station attendant arranged for one of the Western Line express services to stop at Harris Park, which satisfied commuters who by this time had started to demand their money back . However,
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Original:  The next all stations train was scheduled to arrive half an hour later.
Revised:  The next all-stations train was scheduled to arrive half an hour later.
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Original:  There are now only two city services departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from this station to arrive after 9: 12 is at 9: 42. CityRail has been contacted regarding the incident at Harris Park station, and  said that they will investigate and provide an explanation sometime today
Revised:  There are now only two city services departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from this station to arrive after 9: 12am is at 9: 42. CityRail has been contacted regarding the incident at Harris Park station, and said that they will investigate and provide an explanation sometime today
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Original:  There are now only two city services departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from this station to arrive after 9: 12 is at 9: 42. CityRail has been contacted regarding the incident at Harris Park station, and  said that they will investigate and provide an explanation sometime today
Revised:  There are now only two city services departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from this station to arrive after 9: 12 is at 9: 42am. CityRail has been contacted regarding the incident at Harris Park station, and said that they will investigate and provide an explanation sometime today
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Original:  There are now only two city services departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from this station to arrive after 9: 12 is at 9: 42. CityRail has been contacted regarding the incident at Harris Park station, and  said that they will investigate and provide an explanation sometime today
Revised:  There are now only two city services departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from this station to arrive after 9: 12 is at 9: 42. CityRail has been contacted regarding the incident at Harris Park station, and they said that they will investigate and provide an explanation sometime today
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Original:  There are now only two city services departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from this station to arrive after 9:12am is at 9:42am.
Revised:  There are now only two city trains departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from this station to arrive after 9:12am is at 9:42am.
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Original:  There are now only two city trains departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from this station to arrive after 9:12am is at 9:42am.
Revised:  There are now only two city trains departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from that station to arrive after 9:12am is at 9:42am.
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Original:  There are now only two city trains departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from that station to arrive after 9:12am is at 9:42am .
Revised:  There are now only two city trains departing between 8am and 9am, down from the previous four - the next train from that station to arrive after 9:12am is at 9:42am 
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Original:  CityRail has been contacted regarding the incident at Harris Park station, and they said that they will investigate and provide an explanation sometime today
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Original:  the Asian Human Rights Commission - the group that released the footage - has described other portions of the film as too graphic to display  [  
Revised:  the Asian Human Rights Commission - the group that released the footage - has described other portions of the film as too graphic to display . [ 
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Original:  the Asian Human Rights Commission - the group that released the footage - has described other portions of the film as too graphic to display  [  
Revised:  the Asian Human Rights Commission - the group that released the footage - has described other portions of the film as too graphic to display [i 
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Original:  The video shows locals from Papua province being questioned about an aleged arms cache and beaten.
Revised:  The video shows locals from Papua province being questioned about an alleged arms cache and beaten.
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Original:  Agence France-Presse claims that "the police force... is known to torture and abuse detainees of all kinds, including women and those held on minor charges.  
Revised:  Agence France-Presse claims that "the police force... is known to torture and abuse detainees of all kinds, including women and those held on minor charges. Related new
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