wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
Revised:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 metres of swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
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Original:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
Revised:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pickup of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
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Original:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
Revised:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, maximum 3 attempts).
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Original:  Lifeguard certificates are defined separately by each organization – the entry level is " Junior-Retter " (junior rescuer) at the DLRG (the largest aquatics life saving organization in the world) and "Juniorwasserretter " (junior water rescuer) at the Wasserwacht (water rescue branch of the German Red Cross).
Revised:  Lifeguard certificates are defined separately by each organization ; the entry level is " Junior-Retter " (junior rescuer) at the DLRG (the largest aquatics life saving organization in the world) and "Juniorwasserretter " (junior water rescuer) at the Wasserwacht (water rescue branch of the German Red Cross).
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Original:  Lifeguard certificates are defined separately by each organization – the entry level is " Junior-Retter " (junior rescuer) at the DLRG (the largest aquatics life saving organization in the world) and "Juniorwasserretter " (junior water rescuer) at the Wasserwacht (water rescue branch of the German Red Cross).
Revised:  Lifeguard certificates are defined separately by each organization – the entry level is Junior-Retter " (junior rescuer) at the DLRG (the largest aquatics life saving organization in the world) and "Juniorwasserretter " (junior water rescuer) at the Wasserwacht (water rescue branch of the German Red Cross).
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Original:  Lifeguard certificates are defined separately by each organization – the entry level is " Junior-Retter " (junior rescuer) at the DLRG (the largest aquatics life saving organization in the world) and "Juniorwasserretter " (junior water rescuer) at the Wasserwacht (water rescue branch of the German Red Cross).
Revised:  Lifeguard certificates are defined separately by each organization – the entry level is " Junior-Retter (junior rescuer) at the DLRG (the largest aquatics life saving organization in the world) and "Juniorwasserretter " (junior water rescuer) at the Wasserwacht (water rescue branch of the German Red Cross).
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Original:  Lifeguard certificates are defined separately by each organization – the entry level is " Junior-Retter " (junior rescuer) at the DLRG (the largest aquatics life saving organization in the world) and "Juniorwasserretter " (junior water rescuer) at the Wasserwacht (water rescue branch of the German Red Cross).
Revised:  Lifeguard certificates are defined separately by each organization – the entry level is " Junior-Retter " (junior rescuer) at the DLRG (the largest aquatics life saving organization in the world) and Juniorwasserretter (junior water rescuer) at the Wasserwacht (water rescue branch of the German Red Cross).
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Original:  Extended Lifeguard certificate grades can be obtained at three levels of the "Rettungsschwimmabzeichen " (rescue swimming badge) in bronze, silver  and gold.
Revised:  Extended Lifeguard certificate grades can be obtained at three levels of the Rettungsschwimmabzeichen (rescue swimming badge) in bronze, silver and gold.
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Original:  Extended Lifeguard certificate grades can be obtained at three levels of the "Rettungsschwimmabzeichen " (rescue swimming badge) in bronze, silver  and gold.
Revised:  Extended Lifeguard certificate grades can be obtained at three levels of the "Rettungsschwimmabzeichen " (rescue swimming badge) in bronze, silver , and gold.
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Original: Singapore SwimSafer programme works to help children learn how to swim and how to be safe in the water.
Revised: Singapore The Singapore SwimSafer program works to help children learn how to swim and how to be safe in the water.
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Original:  This is a six-stages programme that works with a process that encourages kids to have fun and to learn at a pace that is right for them.
Revised:  This is a six-stage program that encourages kids to have fun and to learn at a pace that is right for them.
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Original:  SwimSafer Stage 1: An Introduction to Water Skills This part works to teach children how to become more confidence and how to become independent in the water.
Revised:  SwimSafer stage 1: An Introduction to Water Skills This part works to teach children how to become more confidence and how to become independent in the water.
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Original:  SwimSafer Stage 1: An Introduction to Water Skills This part works to teach children how to become more confidence and how to become independent in the water.
Revised:  SwimSafer Stage 1: introduction to water skills Stage 1 teaches children to become more confidence and how to become independent in the water.
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Original:  SwimSafer Stage 1: An Introduction to Water Skills This part works to teach children how to become more confidence and how to become independent in the water.
Revised:  SwimSafer Stage 1: An Introduction to Water Skills This part works to teach children how to become more confident and independent in the water.
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Original:  A child can also learn about general water safety, how to  enter and exit a pool  and how to move back and forth in the water.
Revised:  A child can also learn about general water safety, how to properly enter and exit a pool and how to move back and forth in the water.
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Original:  A child can also learn about general water safety, how to  enter and exit a pool  and how to move back and forth in the water.
Revised:  A child can also learn about general water safety, how to enter and exit a pool , and how to move back and forth in the water.
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Original:  SwimSafer Stage 2: Fundamental Water Skills This part of the process involves learning how to handle surface dives, sculling, water safety  and awareness in the water.
Revised:  SwimSafer stage 2: Fundamental Water Skills This part of the process involves learning how to handle surface dives, sculling, water safety and awareness in the water.
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Original:  SwimSafer Stage 2: Fundamental Water Skills This part of the process involves learning how to handle surface dives, sculling, water safety  and awareness in the water.
Revised:  SwimSafer Stage 2: fundamental water skills Stage 2 involves learning how to handle surface dives, sculling, water safety and awareness in the water.
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Original:  SwimSafer Stage 2: Fundamental Water Skills This part of the process involves learning how to handle surface dives, sculling, water safety  and awareness in the water.
Revised:  SwimSafer Stage 2: Fundamental Water Skills This part of the process involves learning how to handle surface dives, sculling, water safety , and awareness in the water.
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Original:  This also involves learning how to get into the water without any assistance.
Revised:  It also involves learning how to get into the water without any assistance.
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Original:  This also involves learning how to get into the water without any assistance.
Revised:  This also involves learning how to enter the water without any assistance.
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Original:  SwimSafer Stage 3: Personal Water Survival and Stroke Developmental Skills Children will learn about how to survive in the water and how to handle different rescue skills.
Revised:  SwimSafer stage 3: Personal Water Survival and Stroke Developmental Skills Children will learn about how to survive in the water and how to handle different rescue skills.
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Original:  SwimSafer Stage 3: Personal Water Survival and Stroke Developmental Skills Children will learn about how to survive in the water and how to handle different rescue skills.
Revised:  SwimSafer Stage 3: personal water survival and stroke developmental skills Children in stage 3 learn how to survive in the water and how to handle different rescue skills.
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Original:  SwimSafer Stage 3: Personal Water Survival and Stroke Developmental Skills Children will learn about how to survive in the water and how to handle different rescue skills.
Revised:  SwimSafer Stage 3: Personal Water Survival and Stroke Developmental Skills Children will learn about how to survive in the water and handle different rescue skills.
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Original:  Sculling , underwater swimming and learning how to use a floatation devicewill be covered here .
Revised:  Additional skills covered are sculling , underwater swimming and learning how to use a floatation devicewill be covered here .
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Original:  Sculling , underwater swimming and learning how to use a floatation devicewill be covered here .
Revised:  Sculling , underwater swimming and learning how to use a flotation device .
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Original:  The goal of this part of the programme is to get a child to be able to swim fifty metres. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SwimSafer Bronze: Personal Water Survival and Stroke Improvement Skills This is where the programme gets to be more advanced .
Revised:  The goal of this stage is to enable children to successfully swim fifty metres. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SwimSafer Bronze: Personal Water Survival and Stroke Improvement Skills This is where the programme gets to be more advanced .
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Original:  At this point the child will learn how to work with stroking movements and coordinated breathing . Kids will be encouraged to get as far as a hundred metresin swimming.
Revised:  At this point the child will learn how to work with stroking movements and coordinated breathing , and are encouraged to swim as far as a hundred metresin swimming.
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Original:  Kids will also learn how to handle watercraft in safe ways while continuing to work on rescue and survival skills. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SwimSafer Silver: Intermediate Personal Water Survival and Stroke Refinement Skills Diving is introduced at this point.
Revised:  Kids will also learn how to safely handle watercraft while continuing to work on rescue and survival skills. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SwimSafer Silver: Intermediate Personal Water Survival and Stroke Refinement Skills Diving is introduced at this point.
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Original:  Kids will also learn how to handle watercraft in safe ways while continuing to work on rescue and survival skills. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SwimSafer Silver: Intermediate Personal Water Survival and Stroke Refinement Skills Diving is introduced at this point.
Revised:  Kids will also learn how to handle watercraft in safe ways while continuing to learn additional rescue and survival skills. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SwimSafer Silver: Intermediate Personal Water Survival and Stroke Refinement Skills Diving is introduced at this point.
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Original:  Kids will also learn how to handle watercraft in safe ways while continuing to work on rescue and survival skills. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SwimSafer Silver: Intermediate Personal Water Survival and Stroke Refinement Skills Diving is introduced at this point.
Revised:  Kids will also learn how to handle watercraft in safe ways while continuing to work on rescue and survival skills. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SwimSafer Silver: intermediate personal water survival and stroke refinement skills Diving is introduced at this point.
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Original:  Advanced survival and rescue skills are also taught here .
Revised:  Advanced survival and rescue skills .
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Original:  Advanced swimming strokes will also be taught at this point in the programme.
Revised:  Advanced swimming strokes will also be taught at this point in the program.
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Original:  SwimSafer Gold: Advanced Personal Water Survival and Swimming Skills Proficiency This is the last part of the progress.
Revised:  SwimSafer Gold: advanced personal water survival and swimming skills proficiency This is the last part of the progress.
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Original:  Standing dive and survival skills will be taught along with advanced lifesaving processes .
Revised:  Standing dive and survival skills are taught here along with advanced lifesaving processes .
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Original: Switzerland In Switzerland the "Schwimmtests " (swimming tests) is not organized in levels – instead each ability is tested by itself and a number of test certificates are put in a group designation.
Revised: Switzerland In Switzerland the Schwimmtests (swimming tests) is not organized in levels – instead each ability is tested by itself and a number of test certificates are put in a group designation.
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Original: Switzerland In Switzerland the "Schwimmtests " (swimming tests) is not organized in levels – instead each ability is tested by itself and a number of test certificates are put in a group designation.
Revised: Switzerland In Switzerland the "Schwimmtests " (swimming tests) are not organized in levels – instead each ability is tested by itself and a number of test certificates are put in a group designation.
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Original: Switzerland In Switzerland the "Schwimmtests " (swimming tests) is not organized in levels – instead each ability is tested by itself and a number of test certificates are put in a group designation.
Revised: Switzerland In Switzerland the "Schwimmtests " (swimming tests) is not organized in levels ; instead each ability is tested by itself and a number of test certificates are put in a group designation.
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Original:  The swimming tests are defined by "swimsports.ch"  which is an association of swimming NGOs and the federal institute for sports (BASPO).
Revised:  The swimming tests are defined by "swimsports.ch" , which is an association of swimming NGOs and the federal institute for sports (BASPO).
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Original:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle)  and Biber (beaver).
Revised:  The Entry level has six tests : Ente (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle) and Biber (beaver).
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Original:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle)  and Biber (beaver).
Revised:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), Schwan (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle) and Biber (beaver).
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Original:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle)  and Biber (beaver).
Revised:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), Seehund (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle) and Biber (beaver).
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Original:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle)  and Biber (beaver).
Revised:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), Nilpferd (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle) and Biber (beaver).
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Original:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle)  and Biber (beaver).
Revised:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), Schildkröte " (turtle) and Biber (beaver).
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Original:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle)  and Biber (beaver).
Revised:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte (turtle) and Biber (beaver).
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Original:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle)  and Biber (beaver).
Revised:  The Entry level has six tests "Ente " (duck), "Schwan " (swan), "Seehund " (sea lion), "Nilpferd " (hippo), " Schildkröte " (turtle) , and Biber (beaver).
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Original:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile)  and Eisbär (polar bear).
Revised:  The Basic level has seven tests : Krebs (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile) and Eisbär (polar bear).
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Original:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile)  and Eisbär (polar bear).
Revised:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), Seepferd (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile) and Eisbär (polar bear).
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Original:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile)  and Eisbär (polar bear).
Revised:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), Frosch (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile) and Eisbär (polar bear).
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Original:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile)  and Eisbär (polar bear).
Revised:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), Pinguin (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile) and Eisbär (polar bear).
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Original:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile)  and Eisbär (polar bear).
Revised:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), Tintenfisch (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile) and Eisbär (polar bear).
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Original:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile)  and Eisbär (polar bear).
Revised:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), Krokodil (crocodile) and Eisbär (polar bear).
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Original:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile)  and Eisbär (polar bear).
Revised:  The Basic level has seven tests "Krebs " (crab), "Seepferd " (seahorse), "Frosch " (frog), "Pinguin " (penguin), "Tintenfisch " (cuttlefish), "Krokodil " (crocodile) , and Eisbär (polar bear).
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Original:  The Advanced level has eight tests "Wal " (whale), "Hecht " (pike), "Hai " (shark), "Delfin " (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned ) .
Revised:  The Advanced level has eight tests : Wal (whale), "Hecht " (pike), "Hai " (shark), "Delfin " (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned ) .
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Original:  The Advanced level has eight tests "Wal " (whale), "Hecht " (pike), "Hai " (shark), "Delfin " (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned ) .
Revised:  The Advanced level has eight tests "Wal " (whale), Hecht (pike), "Hai " (shark), "Delfin " (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned ) .
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Original:  The Advanced level has eight tests "Wal " (whale), "Hecht " (pike), "Hai " (shark), "Delfin " (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned ) .
Revised:  The Advanced level has eight tests "Wal " (whale), "Hecht " (pike), Hai (shark), "Delfin " (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned ) .
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Original:  The Advanced level has eight tests "Wal " (whale), "Hecht " (pike), "Hai " (shark), "Delfin " (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned ) .
Revised:  The Advanced level has eight tests "Wal " (whale), "Hecht " (pike), "Hai " (shark), Delfin (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned ) .
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Original:  The Advanced level has eight tests "Wal " (whale), "Hecht " (pike), "Hai " (shark), "Delfin " (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned ) .
Revised:  The Advanced level has eight tests "Wal " (whale), "Hecht " (pike), "Hai " (shark), "Delfin " (dolphin), and tests named 5 to 8 ( no symbols assigned .
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Original: Australia Canada In Canada, the Canadian Red Cross Swim program is used, with over one million Canadians enrolling each year.
Revised:  Canada In Canada, the Canadian Red Cross Swim program is used, with over one million Canadians enrolling each year.
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Original:     Singapore The Singapore SwimSafer program works to help children learn how to swim and how to be safe in the water.
Revised: Netherlands The Dutch National Swimming diploma is issued by the National council for swim safety. The national swimming diploma exist of the Swim-ABC and seperate swimming skill diploma's. The National Council for swim safety advices children to get the full Swim-ABC program. This three-stage program will teach children the basic skills of swimming. When a child understands and masters the fundaments of the basic swimming skills, they will earn a diploma. The Swim-ABC program consists of three seperate diploma's. After getting all diploma's you oficially meet the standards of the National norm of swim safety. Singapore The Singapore SwimSafer program works to help children learn how to swim and how to be safe in the water.
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