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Original: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal • Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal • Editing proposal drafts • Manage requests for cost sharing • Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts • Manage “Red Team”
Revised: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal • Editing proposal drafts • Manage requests for cost sharing • Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts • Manage “Red Team”
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Original: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal • Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal • Editing proposal drafts • Manage requests for cost sharing • Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts • Manage “Red Team”
Revised: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal • Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal Editing proposal drafts • Manage requests for cost sharing • Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts • Manage “Red Team”
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Original: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal • Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal • Editing proposal drafts • Manage requests for cost sharing • Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts • Manage “Red Team”
Revised: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal • Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal • Editing proposal drafts Manage requests for cost sharing • Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts • Manage “Red Team”
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Original: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal • Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal • Editing proposal drafts • Manage requests for cost sharing • Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts • Manage “Red Team”
Revised: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal • Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal • Editing proposal drafts • Manage requests for cost sharing Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts • Manage “Red Team”
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Original: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal • Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal • Editing proposal drafts • Manage requests for cost sharing • Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts • Manage “Red Team”
Revised: • Developing Budgets and budget justifications for application • Handling Letters of Support/Biosketches/COI/Compliance/ • Developing Diversity Sections for Grant Proposals • Developing RCR education Sections for Grant Proposals • Coordinating/Finding Collaborating institutions for a proposal • Suggesting collaborating scientists for a proposal • Editing proposal drafts • Manage requests for cost sharing • Coordinating pre-submission peer reviews of proposal drafts Manage "Red Team"
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Original:  reviewers or external review process • Proposal Submission Support (copying, mailing, pdf generation, etc.) • Coordinating Core Facility information • Assist with Just in Time or additional information requests from sponsor after proposal submission • Assist with post-award set-up of project to get it off the ground and/or communicate with collaborators post-award.
Revised:  reviewers or external review process Proposal Submission Support (copying, mailing, pdf generation, etc.) • Coordinating Core Facility information • Assist with Just in Time or additional information requests from sponsor after proposal submission • Assist with post-award set-up of project to get it off the ground and/or communicate with collaborators post-award.
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Original:  reviewers or external review process • Proposal Submission Support (copying, mailing, pdf generation, etc.) • Coordinating Core Facility information • Assist with Just in Time or additional information requests from sponsor after proposal submission • Assist with post-award set-up of project to get it off the ground and/or communicate with collaborators post-award.
Revised:  reviewers or external review process • Proposal Submission Support (copying, mailing, pdf generation, etc.) Coordinating Core Facility information • Assist with Just in Time or additional information requests from sponsor after proposal submission • Assist with post-award set-up of project to get it off the ground and/or communicate with collaborators post-award.
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Original:  reviewers or external review process • Proposal Submission Support (copying, mailing, pdf generation, etc.) • Coordinating Core Facility information • Assist with Just in Time or additional information requests from sponsor after proposal submission • Assist with post-award set-up of project to get it off the ground and/or communicate with collaborators post-award.
Revised:  reviewers or external review process • Proposal Submission Support (copying, mailing, pdf generation, etc.) • Coordinating Core Facility information Assist with Just in Time or additional information requests from sponsor after proposal submission • Assist with post-award set-up of project to get it off the ground and/or communicate with collaborators post-award.
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Original:  reviewers or external review process • Proposal Submission Support (copying, mailing, pdf generation, etc.) • Coordinating Core Facility information • Assist with Just in Time or additional information requests from sponsor after proposal submission • Assist with post-award set-up of project to get it off the ground and/or communicate with collaborators post-award.
Revised:  reviewers or external review process • Proposal Submission Support (copying, mailing, pdf generation, etc.) • Coordinating Core Facility information • Assist with Just in Time or additional information requests from sponsor after proposal submission Assist with post-award set-up of project to get it off the ground and/or communicate with collaborators post-award.
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Original:  • Analyze proposal reviews and provide feedback to investigators or other institutional officials Research development and team science Team science is characterized by large multi-, inter- and transdisciplinary collaborative research projects by large teams of scientists that often integrate research with broader goals including education, technology transfer, outreach and diversity enhancement.
Revised:  Analyze proposal reviews and provide feedback to investigators or other institutional officials Research development and team science Team science is characterized by large multi-, inter- and transdisciplinary collaborative research projects by large teams of scientists that often integrate research with broader goals including education, technology transfer, outreach and diversity enhancement.
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Original:  • Analyze proposal reviews and provide feedback to investigators or other institutional officials Research development and team science Team science is characterized by large multi-, inter- and transdisciplinary collaborative research projects by large teams of scientists that often integrate research with broader goals including education, technology transfer, outreach and diversity enhancement.
Revised:  • Analyze proposal reviews and provide feedback to investigators or other institutional officials Team science Team science is characterized by large multi-, inter- and transdisciplinary collaborative research projects by large teams of scientists that often integrate research with broader goals including education, technology transfer, outreach and diversity enhancement.
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Original:  URL See also Science of Team Science References
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Original:  URL Budescu, G. and Walker, B.L.E. 2012.
Revised:  URL G. and Walker, B.L.E. 2012.
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Original:  e.g. research mini-symposia Develop and/or coordinate resources and tools to promote collaboration Provide guidance and expertise for building and fostering connections and teams Maintain faculty expertise database and other collaboration web tools Facilitating collaborations between investigators at your own institution Facilitating collaborations between investigators at other institutions Manage the institution ’
Revised:  e.g. research mini-symposia Develop and/or coordinate resources and tools to promote collaboration Provide guidance and expertise for building and fostering connections and teams Maintain faculty expertise database and other collaboration web tools Facilitating collaborations between investigators at your own institution Facilitating collaborations between investigators at other institutions Manage the institution '
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Original:  s Research Networking Tool Team science Team science is "scientific collaboration, i.e., research conducted by more than one individual in an interdependent fashion"  Cooke, N.J. and Hilton, M.L., eds. 2015.
Revised:  s Research Networking Tool Team science Team science is "scientific collaboration, i.e., research conducted by more than one individual in an interdependent fashion" . Cooke, N.J. and Hilton, M.L., eds. 2015.
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Original:  Washington, D.C.: National Academies Press, p. 22.
Revised:  Washington, D.C.: National Academies Press, p. 22
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Original:  With the goal of enabling competitive individual and team research and facilitating research excellence, research development professionals build and implement strategic services and collaborative resources that span across disciplinary and administrative barriers within their organizations and  beyond.
Revised:  With the goal of enabling competitive individual and team research and facilitating research excellence, research development professionals build and implement strategic services and collaborative resources that span across disciplinary and administrative barriers within their organizations and nothing beyond.
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Original:  Some of the best field hunters are from Ireland, such as the Irish Draught → .
Revised:  Some of the best field hunters are from Ireland, such as the Irish Draught .
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Original:  Some of the best field hunters are from Ireland, such as the Irish Sport Horse.
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Original:   It may be of any breed, but should possess stamina, a level head, and bravery.
Revised:  Characteristics It may be of any breed, but should possess stamina, a level head, and bravery.
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Original:   Field hunter trials  are regularly held to test these horses, and have become a popular form of equestrian competition.
Revised:  Field hunter trials Field hunter trials are regularly held to test these horses, and have become a popular form of equestrian competition.
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Original:  The British working hunter is not required to jump obstacles exactly like those met in the hunting field, although a water tray is sometimes used to simulate a ditch, and natural dips in the ground, banks etc. are often incorporated into the course in order to make it more challenging .
Revised:  The British working hunter is not required to jump obstacles exactly like those met in the hunting field, although a water tray is sometimes used to simulate a ditch, and natural dips in the ground, banks etc. are often incorporated into the course in order to make it more challenge .
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Original:  In some ways, the field hunter is more similar to a good cross-country horse seen in eventing than a show-ring hunter, as it must gallop and jump over varied terrain, jump ditches, coops, up and down banks, and occasionally go through water.  
Revised:  In some ways, the field hunter is more similar to a good cross-country horse seen in eventing than a show-ring hunter, as it must gallop and jump over varied terrain, jump ditches, coops, up and down banks, and occasionally go through water. Notes 
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Original:  In some ways, the field hunter is more similar to a good cross-country horse seen in eventing than a show-ring hunter, as it must gallop and jump over varied terrain, jump ditches, coops, up and down banks, and occasionally go through water.  
Revised:  In some ways, the field hunter is more similar to a good cross-country horse seen in eventing than a show-ring hunter, as it must gallop and jump over varied terrain, jump ditches, coops, up and down banks, and occasionally go through water. References
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Original:  In some ways, the field hunter is more similar to a good cross-country horse seen in eventing than a show-ring hunter, as it must gallop and jump over varied terrain, jump ditches, coops, up and down banks, and occasionally go through water  .
Revised:  Point-to-point .
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Original: Characteristics It may be of any breed, but should possess stamina, a level head, and bravery.
Revised: Characteristics The field hunter may be of any breed, but should possess stamina, a level head, and bravery.
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Original:  In its simplest form  the hazard ratio can be interpreted as the chance of an event occurring in the treatment arm divided by the chance of the event occurring in the control arm, or vice versa, of a study.
Revised:  In its simplest form , the hazard ratio can be interpreted as the chance of an event occurring in the treatment arm divided by the chance of the event occurring in the control arm, or vice versa, of a study.
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Original:  The resolution of these endpoints are usually depicted using Kaplan-Meier survival curves.
Revised:  The resolution of these endpoints are usually depicted using Kaplan–Meier survival curves.
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Original:  The hazard ratio is simply the relationship between the instantaneous hazards in the two groups and represents, in a single number, the magnitude of distance between the Kaplan-Meier plots.
Revised:  The hazard ratio is simply the relationship between the instantaneous hazards in the two groups and represents, in a single number, the magnitude of distance between the Kaplan–Meier plots.
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Original:  “ It formed Renew Blue in Dallas as a wholly owned subsidiary charged with licensing the SEADOG pump.
Revised:  It formed Renew Blue in Dallas as a wholly owned subsidiary charged with licensing the SEADOG pump.
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Original:  He recontested the 2013 election as a Pakatan Rakyat candidate, but lost his seat to Tangau, who had returned to the UPKO deputy presidency.
Revised:  He recontested the 2013 election as a PKR candidate, but lost his seat to Tangau, who had returned to the UPKO deputy presidency.
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Original:  Bumburing did, however, win the seat of Tamparuli in the Sabah State Legislative Assembly  .
Revised:  C did, however, win the seat of Tamparuli in the Sabah State Legislative Assembly .
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Original: Bumburing was first elected to the State Assembly in 1985 , as a member of the United Sabah Party (PBS).
Revised: Bumburing was first elected to the State Assembly in 1986 , as a member of the United Sabah Party (PBS).
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Original: Mir Yazdanbakhsh of Khar Zar was a chieftain of the Hazara people in the Hazarajat of central Afghanistan in the 19th century.
Revised: Mir Yazdanbakhsh of Kharzar was a chieftain of the Hazara people in the Hazarajat of central Afghanistan in the 19th century.
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Original: Corporate Architecture is an architectonic discipline which focuses on designing and constructing buildings, spaces or environments , with the aim of meeting the needs of a business community (a corporation).
Revised: Corporate architecture is an architectonic discipline which focuses on designing and constructing buildings, spaces or environments , with the aim of meeting the needs of a business community (a corporation).
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Original: Corporate Architecture is an architectonic discipline which focuses on designing and constructing buildings, spaces or environments , with the aim of meeting the needs of a business community (a corporation).
Revised: Corporate Architecture is an architectonic discipline which focuses on designing and constructing buildings, spaces or environments with the aim of meeting the needs of a business community (a corporation).
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Original: Corporate architecture is an architectonic discipline which focuses on designing and constructing buildings, spaces or environments with the aim of meeting the needs of a business community (a corporation ).
Revised: Corporate architecture is an architectonic discipline which focuses on designing and constructing buildings, spaces or environments with the aim of meeting the needs of a business community (a corporation 
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Original: Abbatija Tad-Dejr is similar to the Hypogeum of Ħal-Saflieni but it houses one of the most important early Christian burial sites south of Rome (although smaller in size than those found in Rome, Naples and Syracuse).
Revised: Abbatija Tad-Dejr The Abbatija Tad-Dejr hypogeal complex is one of the most important early Christian burial sites south of Rome (although smaller in size than those found in Rome, Naples and Syracuse).
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Original:  Actually an ongoing Partnership Agreement has been signed between Heritage Malta and Din l-Art Helwa for the restoration of the site of Abbattija tad-Dejr Catacombs in Rabat.
Revised:  Actually an ongoing Partnership Agreement has been signed between Heritage Malta and Din l-Art Helwa for the 
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Original:  The main objective is to safeguard the Catacombs for the enjoyment of future generations, which would benefit from a site closed up to now.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Archaeology museums Category:Museums in Malta Category:Catacombs Category:Cemeteries Category:Ancient Christian sit
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Original: Abbatija Tad-Dejr  The Abbatija Tad-Dejr hypogeal complex is one of the most important paleochristian burial sites in Rabat, Malta.
Revised: Abbatija Tad-Dejr The Abbatija Tad-Dejr hypogeal complex is a paleochristian burial site in Rabat, Malta.
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Original:  It is managed by Heritage Malta and is currently closed for conservation.
Revised:  The site is managed by Heritage Malta and is currently closed for conservation.
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Original:  Use The presence in the hypogeum of a stone altar and the number of crosses carved into the rock surface suggest early Christian use.
Revised:  Uses The presence in the hypogeum of a stone altar and the number of crosses carved into the rock surface suggest early Christian use.
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Original:  A fresco which , until recently, decorated the apse over the supposed location of the original altar is now housed in the National Museum of Fine Arts.
Revised:  A fresco that , until recently, decorated the apse over the supposed location of the original altar is now housed in the National Museum of Fine Arts.
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Original:  In December 2010, building on the success of the award winning and best-selling Volume 1 results, the Physique 57 DVD Workout Series Volume 2 was released.
Revised:  In December 2010, the Physique 57 DVD Workout Series Volume 2 was released.
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Original:  Launched in 2006, Physique 57 owns and operates nine studios in New York City, the Hamptons, Los Angeles, Dubai and Bangkok.
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Original:  Physique 57 co-founder Jennifer Vaughan Maanavi is a dance enthusiast, Columbia MBA and former Wall Street professional.
Revised:  Its co-founder Jennifer Vaughan Maanavi is a dance enthusiast, Columbia MBA and former Wall Street professional.
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Original:  Partnerships In 2013, Physique 57 partnered with Fox Sports' Erin Andrews to bring a new online workout, Physique's Get Fit Quick featuring Erin Andrews, to their online workout program.
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Original:  New York Times: The Time of the Tummy The Los Angeles Times: Beginner Barre Workout Wall Street Journal: Pilates Devotee Finds Cardio at the Ballet Barre ABC News: Tips to not fall off the fitness wagon New York Magazine: 7 Best Online Workout SOMA Fitness Studios
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Original:  He is a member of the Sabah Progressive Party (SAPP) , which sits on the crossbenches of Parliament . Majimbun was elected to federal Parliament in the 2004 election for the seat of Sepanggar.
Revised:  He is a member of the Sabah Progressive Party (SAPP) . Majimbun was elected to federal Parliament in the 2004 election for the seat of Sepanggar.
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Original: Election results + Parliament of Malaysia: P171 Sepanggar, SabahYearBarisan NasionalVotesPctOppositionVotesPct2004 (SAPP)16,22673\%Saidatul Badru Mohd Said (PKR)5,09823\%2008A third candidate, Ewol Muji of the Democratic Action Party, received 14\% of the vote.
Revised: Election results + Parliament of Malaysia: P171 Sepanggar, SabahYearGovernmentVotesPctOppositionVotesPct2004 (SAPP)16,22673\%Saidatul Badru Mohd Said (PKR)5,09823\%2008A third candidate, Ewol Muji of the Democratic Action Party, received 14\% of the vote.
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Original:  It is an updated version of René Descartes's evil demon thought experiment originated by Gilbert Harman.
Revised:  It is a modern incarnation of René Descartes's evil demon thought experiment originated by Gilbert Harman.
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