wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  According to Iranian human rights activists, over 4,000 gay men and lesbians have been executed since the Iranian Revolution of 1979 
Revised:  According to Iranian human rights activists, over 4,000 gay men and lesbians have been executed since the Iranian Revolution of 1979. 
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Original:  According to Iranian human rights activists, over 4,000 gay men and lesbians have been executed since the Iranian Revolution of 1979.
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Original:  Cars, buses, and even military vehicles were burned as plumes of smoke rose above the city.
Revised:  Cars, buses, and military vehicles were burned as plumes of smoke rose above the city.
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Original:  In a statement, the Dalai Lama called on both sides to end the violence .
Revised:  In a statement, the Dalai Lama called the protests a "manifestation of the deep-rooted resentment of the Tibetan people". He insisted that both sides end the violence .
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Original:  He told the Chinese government to "stop using force and address the long-simmering resentment of the Tibetan people through dialogue . " He also urged his "fellow Tibetans not to resort to violence."
Revised:  He told the Chinese government to "stop using force and address the long-simmering resentment of the Tibetan people through dialogue , " He also urged his "fellow Tibetans not to resort to violence."
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Original:  He told the Chinese government to "stop using force and address the long-simmering resentment of the Tibetan people through dialogue . " He also urged his "fellow Tibetans not to resort to violence."
Revised:  He told the Chinese government to "stop using force and address the long-simmering resentment of the Tibetan people through dialogue . " and he urged his "fellow Tibetans not to resort to violence."
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Original:  A Chinese official said the government is "fully capable of maintaining social stability" in Tibet   
Revised:  A Chinese official said the government is "fully capable of maintaining social stability" in Tibet . 
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Original: The protests began rather peacefully on Monday, when a group of monks marched in Llasa to advocate religious freedom.
Revised: The protests began rather peacefully on Monday, when a group of monks marched in Lhasa to advocate religious freedom.
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Original:  Psurbu Tsering of the  Tibetan Association of New York and New Jersey  said his members had received phone calls from Tibet, claiming 70 people had been killed and 1,000 arrested in Tibet.
Revised:  Psurbu Tsering of the " Tibetan Association of New York and New Jersey said his members had received phone calls from Tibet, claiming 70 people had been killed and 1,000 arrested in Tibet.
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Original:  Psurbu Tsering of the  Tibetan Association of New York and New Jersey  said his members had received phone calls from Tibet, claiming 70 people had been killed and 1,000 arrested in Tibet.
Revised:  Psurbu Tsering of the Tibetan Association of New York and New Jersey " said his members had received phone calls from Tibet, claiming 70 people had been killed and 1,000 arrested in Tibet.
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Original: 200px|An earlier Proton launch|right At 23:18:55 GMT this evening, a  Proton-M/Briz-M rocket launched from Area 200/39 at the Baikonur Cosmodrome  , with the AMC-14 satellite for  SES Americom.
Revised: 200px|An earlier Proton launch|right At 23:18:55 GMT this evening, a Proton-M/Briz-M rocket launched from Area 200/39 at the Baikonur Cosmodrome , with the AMC-14 satellite for American communications organisation SES Americom.
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Original:  The rocket, operated by International Launch Services  , lifted off on time, and headed towards a Geosynchronous orbit.
Revised:  The rocket, operated by International Launch Services (ILS) , lifted off on time, and headed towards a Geosynchronous orbit.
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Original:   AMC-14, which will be operated in conjunction with Echostar will provide direct-to-home satellite television services.
Revised:  AMC-14, which would have been operated in conjunction with Echostar will provide direct-to-home satellite television services.
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Original:   AMC-14, which will be operated in conjunction with Echostar will provide direct-to-home satellite television services.
Revised:  AMC-14, which will be operated in conjunction with Echostar was to provide direct-to-home satellite television services.
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Original:  It is based on the Lockheed Martin A2100 satellite bus.
Revised:  It was based on the Lockheed Martin A2100 satellite bus.
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Original:  The Proton performed nominally, and the Briz-M upper stage has successfully completed the first of three burns 
Revised:  The Proton performed nominally, and the Briz-M upper stage successfully completed the first of three burns 
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Original:  During the second  , however, an undisclosed malfunction occurred, leaving the satellite stranded in a much lower orbit than planned.
Revised:  During the second burn , however, an undisclosed malfunction occurred, leaving the satellite stranded in a much lower orbit than planned.
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Original:  It is also the 334th launch of the Proton rocket, the 41st Proton launch failure, the 2,800th Russian orbital launch, and the 45th  launch to be conducted by ILS.
Revised:  It is also the 334th launch of the Proton rocket, the 41st Proton launch failure, the 2,800th Russian orbital launch, and the 45th Proton launch to be conducted by ILS.
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Original: 200px|An earlier Proton launch|right At 23:18:55 GMT this evening, a Russian Proton-M/ Briz-M rocket launched from Area 200/39 at the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan, with the AMC-14 satellite for American communications organisation SES Americom.
Revised: 200px|An earlier Proton launch|right At 23:18:55 GMT this evening, a Russian Proton-M/ Beeze-M rocket launched from Area 200/39 at the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan, with the AMC-14 satellite for American communications organisation SES Americom.
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Original:  The Proton itself performed nominally, and the Briz-M upper stage successfully completed the first of three burns.
Revised:  The Proton itself performed nominally, and the Breeze-M upper stage successfully completed the first of three burns.
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Original:  It is unclear whether the satllite is recoverable.
Revised:  It is unclear whether the satellite is recoverable.
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Original: 200px|An earlier Proton launch|right At 23:18:55 GMT this evening, a Russian Proton-M/ Beeze-M rocket launched from Area 200/39 at the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan, with the AMC-14 satellite for American communications organisation SES Americom.
Revised: 200px|An earlier Proton launch|right At 23:18:55 GMT this evening, a Russian Proton-M/ Briz-M rocket launched from Area 200/39 at the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan, with the AMC-14 satellite for American communications organisation SES Americom.
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Original:  AMC-14, which would have been operated in conjunction with Echostar was to provide direct-to-home high definition satellite television services.
Revised:  AMC-14, which would have been operated in conjunction with Echostar was to provide direct-to-home satellite television services.
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Original:  The Proton itself performed nominally, and the Breeze-M upper stage successfully completed the first of three burns.
Revised:  The Proton itself performed nominally, and the Briz-M upper stage successfully completed the first of three burns.
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Original:  It is unclear whether the satellite is recoverable.
Revised:  It is unclear whether the satllite is recoverable.
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Original: Bebo - its full name being Blog Early Blog Often - started off its life with its name being adopted from a suggestion a journalist made, as well as the memorable nature of the name.
Revised: Bebo - its full name being Blog Early Blog Often - started off life with its name being adopted from a suggestion a journalist made, as well as the memorable nature of the name.
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Original:  Bebo won the People's Choice award in the Social Networking category at the 2006 w: Webby awards and was named as the number one search term in the Year-End Google Zeitgeist 2006."
Revised:  Bebo won the People's Choice award in the Social Networking category at the 2006 Webby awards and was named as the number one search term in the Year-End Google Zeitgeist 2006."
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Original: Within 10 laps near the Sanchong Road and Nangang Road, Po-hung Wu, who ever crashed yesterday after the finish line, crashed again and was forced to quit this race.
Revised: Within 10 laps near the Sanchong Road and Nangang Road, Po-hung Wu, who crashed yesterday after the finish line, crashed again and was forced to quit this race.
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Original: Within 10 laps near the Sanchong Road and Nangang Road, Po-hung Wu, who ever crashed yesterday after the finish line, crashed again and was forced to quit this race.
Revised: Within 10 laps near the Sanchong Road and Nangang Road, Po-hung Wu, who ever crashed yesterday after the finish line, crashed again and was forced to quit the race.
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Original:  Around fifty are thought to be in comas.
Revised:  Five are reported to be in comas.
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Original:  The three teams refered to were dismantling obsolete munitions stored there, as part of a programme to remove Stalinist era arms and modernise the military in order to qualify for an invitation to join NATO next month     
Revised:  The three teams refered to were dismantling obsolete munitions stored there, as part of a programme to remove Stalinist era arms and modernise the military in order to qualify for an invitation to join NATO next month . 
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Original: A series of explosions have hit an Albanian arms depot near Tirana, leaving at least 155 people dead or injured.
Revised: A series of explosions have hit an Albanian arms depot near Tirana, leaving at least 155 people injured.
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Original:  The three teams refered to were dismantling obsolete munitions stored there, as part of a programme to remove Stalinist era arms and modernise the military in order to qualify for an invitation to join NATO next month.
Revised:  The three teams refered to were dismantling obsolete munitions stored there, as part of a programme to remove Stalinist era arms and modernize the military in order to qualify for an invitation to join NATO next month.
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Original:  Injured people have been rushed to hosptal amid ongoing explosions, which Interior Ministry spokesman Avni Neza says have prevented helicopters landing in the area.
Revised:  Injured people have been rushed to hospital amid ongoing explosions, which Interior Ministry spokesman Avni Neza says have prevented helicopters landing in the area.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Neza says police and army units are attempting to reach the area in armoured cars.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Neza says police and army units are attempting to reach the area in armored cars.
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Original:  Albanian health minister Nard Ndoka said that the 155 known to be hospitalised so far had to make their way to nearby villages as the ongoing explosions had also prevented road ambulances reaching the scene.
Revised:  Albanian health minister Nard Ndoka said that the 155 known to be hospitalized so far had to make their way to nearby villages as the ongoing explosions had also prevented road ambulances reaching the scene.
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Original:  Tirana Airport spokesman Arlinda Causholli said glass windows and doors at the airport, a few kilomtres from the site, were shattered by the initial series of explosions.
Revised:  Tirana Airport spokesman Arlinda Causholli said glass windows and doors at the airport, a few kilometers from the site, were shattered by the initial series of explosions.
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Original: Injured people have been rushed to hospital amid ongoing explosions, which Interior Ministry spokesman Avni Neza says have prevented helicopters landing in the area.
Revised: Injured people have been rushed to hospitals amid ongoing explosions, which Interior Ministry spokesman Avni Neza says have prevented helicopters landing in the area.
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Original: The Buffalo Sabres romped the Carolina Hurricanes 7-1 in a heated  at the HSBC Arena in Buffalo.
Revised: The Buffalo Sabres romped the Carolina Hurricanes 7-1 in a heated match at the HSBC Arena in Buffalo.
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Original:  The Panthers scored first, and then fell behind 2-1. w:Jassen Cullimore |Jassen Cullimore tied the game up with a goal 11:42 of the second period, and go on to win the game on the strength of Olli Jokinen's powerplay goal at 7:12 of the third period.
Revised:  The Panthers scored first, and then fell behind 2-1. Jassen Cullimore tied the game up with a goal 11:42 of the second period, and go on to win the game on the strength of Olli Jokinen's powerplay goal at 7:12 of the third period.
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Original:  Eight different Sharks players had points as the San Jose Sharks beat the St. Louis Blues 4-1 at the HP Pavillion in San Jose.
Revised:  Eight different Sharks players had points as the San Jose Sharks beat the St. Louis Blues 4-1 at the HP Pavillion at San Jose.
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Original:  Hannu Toivonen made 23 saves on 27 shots, while his counterpart Evgeni Navokov 20 saves out of a possible 21  
Revised:  Hannu Toivonen made 23 saves on 27 shots, while his counterpart Evgeni Navokov 20 saves out of a possible 21. 
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Original:  The spacecraft, which forms part of the US Air Force's NAVSTAR Global Positioning System, has been successfully delivered int a Medium Earth orbit.
Revised:  The spacecraft, which forms part of the US Air Force's NAVSTAR Global Positioning System, has been successfully delivered into a Medium Earth orbit.
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Original:  The rocket flew in the 7925-9.5 configuration, with 9 GEM-40 solid-rocket boosters, an Extra Extended Long Tank Thor first stage, a Delta-K second stage, a Star 48B third stage, and a 9.5 ft (2.9m) diameter payload fairing  Launch was conducted by United Launch Alliance (ULA).
Revised:  The rocket flew in the 7925-9.5 configuration, with 9 GEM-40 solid-rocket boosters, an Extra Extended Long Tank Thor first stage, a Delta-K second stage, a Star 48B third stage, and a 9.5 ft (2.9m) diameter payload fairing . Launch was conducted by United Launch Alliance (ULA).
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Original: While protesting outside the Scientology Church of Georgia in Atlanta,  two members of the group Anonymous were arrested by DeKalb County riot police while standing opposite the Church of Scientology-owned building.
Revised: While protesting outside the Scientology Church of Georgia in Atlanta, Georgia, United States, two members of the group Anonymous were arrested by DeKalb County riot police while standing opposite the Church of Scientology-owned building.
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Original:  The videos show a very quick arrest in which the arresting officers did not read the Miranda rights of the protesters, which  contrary to popular belief , is only required to be read before a police officer interviews someone in custody.
Revised:  The videos show a very quick arrest in which the arresting officers did not read the Miranda rights of the protesters, which — contrary to popular belief , is only required to be read before a police officer interviews someone in custody.
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Original:  The videos show a very quick arrest in which the arresting officers did not read the Miranda rights of the protesters, which  contrary to popular belief , is only required to be read before a police officer interviews someone in custody.
Revised:  The videos show a very quick arrest in which the arresting officers did not read the Miranda rights of the protesters, which contrary to popular belief — is only required to be read before a police officer interviews someone in custody.
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Original:  If the police -- nay, the walking tanks, totally uncalled for with a peaceful protest -- had them unmask inside ... suffice it to say if they get harassed, there will be great big steaming piles of hell to pay."
Revised:  If the police — nay, the walking tanks, totally uncalled for with a peaceful protest -- had them unmask inside ... suffice it to say if they get harassed, there will be great big steaming piles of hell to pay."
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Original:  If the police -- nay, the walking tanks, totally uncalled for with a peaceful protest -- had them unmask inside ... suffice it to say if they get harassed, there will be great big steaming piles of hell to pay."
Revised:  If the police -- nay, the walking tanks, totally uncalled for with a peaceful protest — had them unmask inside ... suffice it to say if they get harassed, there will be great big steaming piles of hell to pay."
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Original:  Scientology critic Jeff Jacobsen,  interviewed by Wikinews on February 19, wrote on his blog: "But then I see that the Atlanta police arrested two Anons, and were even stopping cars that honked in approval of the protest!
Revised:  Scientology critic Jeff Jacobsen, who was interviewed by Wikinews on February 19, wrote on his blog: "But then I see that the Atlanta police arrested two Anons, and were even stopping cars that honked in approval of the protest!
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Original: While protesting outside the Scientology Church of Georgia in Atlanta, Georgia, United States, two members of the group Anonymous were arrested by DeKalb County riot police while standing opposite the Church of Scientology-owned building.
Revised: While protesting outside the Scientology Church of Georgia in Atlanta, Georgia, United States, two members of the group Anonymous were arrested by DeKalb County riot police in Atlanta, Georgia while protesting outside the local Church of Scientology-owned building.
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Original:  The two protesters, who earlier participated in the delivery of a 'global speech' collaboratively written and read by members of Anonymous at protests worldwide, are believed to have been charged by Dekalb police for protesting without a permit and causing 'offensive or hazardous conditions'.
Revised:  They are believed to have been charged by Dekalb police for protesting without a permit and causing 'offensive or hazardous conditions'.
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Original:  The two protesters, who earlier participated in the delivery of a 'global speech' collaboratively written and read by members of Anonymous at protests worldwide, are believed to have been charged by Dekalb police for protesting without a permit and causing 'offensive or hazardous conditions'.
Revised:  The two protesters, who earlier participated in the delivery of a 'global speech' collaboratively written and read by members of Anonymous at protests worldwide, are believed to have been charged with protesting without a permit and causing 'offensive or hazardous conditions'.
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Original:  Members of Anonymous have composed an open letter to Dekalb's Chief of Police, asking if such a show of police strength was really needed at a non-violent protest organised and attended mainly by college students and young Americans .
Revised:  Members of the group have written an open letter to Dekalb's Chief of Police, asking if such a show of police strength was really needed at a non-violent protest organised and attended mainly by college students and young Americans .
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Original:  Members of Anonymous have composed an open letter to Dekalb's Chief of Police, asking if such a show of police strength was really needed at a non-violent protest organised and attended mainly by college students and young Americans .
Revised:  Members of Anonymous have composed an open letter to Dekalb's Chief of Police, questioning the necessity of the arrests .
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Original: Video of the arrest Two American members of the group Anonymous were arrested by DeKalb County riot police in Atlanta, Georgia while protesting outside the local Church of Scientology-owned building.
Revised:  Two American members of the group Anonymous were arrested by DeKalb County riot police in Atlanta, Georgia while protesting outside the local Church of Scientology-owned building.
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Original:  They are believed to have been charged with protesting without a permit and creating an offensive environment  .
Revised:  All five were charged with creating an offensive environment .
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Original:  Other members of the local Anonymous group insist that they had been told that a permit would not be necessary for the gathering.
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Original: Five American members of the group Anonymous were arrested by DeKalb County riot police in Atlanta, Georgia while protesting outside the local Church of Scientology-owned building.
Revised: Five American members of the group Anonymous were arrested by DeKalb County riot police while standing opposite the Church of Scientology-owned building.
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Original:  All five were charged with creating an offensive environment, and two also faced charges of using a bullhorn while stepping into traffic.
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Original:  Members of the group have written an open letter to Dekalb's Chief of Police, questioning the necessity of the arrests .
Revised:  Members of Anonymous have composed an open letter to Dekalb's Chief of Police, questioning the necessity of the arrests .
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Original:  Members of the group have written an open letter to Dekalb's Chief of Police, questioning the necessity of the arrests .
Revised:  Members of the group have written an open letter to Dekalb's Chief of Police, asking if such a show of police strength was really needed at a non-violent protest organised and attended mainly by college students and young Americans .
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Original:   A thrilling race ended with only seven drivers met the chequered flag.
Revised:  Neither Kimi Räikkönen, the last year champion and previous race here winner, nor his teammate Felipe Massa scored any points for Ferrari. A thrilling race ended with only seven drivers met the chequered flag.
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Original:  Still, Kimi managed to get one point after the disqualification of Barrichello 
Revised:  Still, Kimi managed to get one point after the disqualification of Barrichello .
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Original: HSK Kormoran, in Kiel, Germany taking on stores before sailing c1940 Australian Prime Minister Kevin Rudd announced today that the HSK Kormoran has been located approximately 112 nautical miles off w:Steep Point , Western Australia.
Revised: HSK Kormoran, in Kiel, Germany taking on stores before sailing c1940 Australian Prime Minister Kevin Rudd announced today that the HSK Kormoran has been located approximately 112 nautical miles off Steep Point Western Australia.
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Original:  The resulting battle saw the Sydney sunk wunk with the loss of all 645 hands, the Kormoran was scuttled by the crew with the loss of 60 crew, 320 survivors including 3 Chinese prisoners of war were rescued.
Revised:  The resulting battle saw the Sydney sunk with the loss of all 645 hands, the Kormoran was scuttled by the crew with the loss of 60 crew, 320 survivors including 3 Chinese prisoners of war were rescued.
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Original:  Warren Snowdon Minister for Defense Science and Personnel said that the Federal Republic of Germany has been advised of the discovery and that the site is to be protected  
Revised:  Warren Snowdon Minister for Defense Science and Personnel said that the Federal Republic of Germany has been advised of the discovery and that the site is to be protected . 
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Original:  On November 19 1941, the Kormoran encountered the w: HMAS Sydney.
Revised:  On November 19 1941, the Kormoran encountered the HMAS Sydney.
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