wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  When the bus stopped he shot the driver in the head with his M-16 and began systematically firing as passengers crouched behind seats.
Revised:  When the bus stopped he shot the driver in the head with his M16 and began systematically firing as passengers crouched behind seats.
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Original:  Eden's mother Debbie, speaking from the family home in Rishon Lezion was told that someone must be AWOL for 45 days to be officially considered a deserter and was advised to go herself to  Tapuah to disarm her son.
Revised:  Eden's mother Debbie, speaking from the family home in Rishon LeZion was told that someone must be AWOL for 45 days to be officially considered a deserter and was advised to go herself to Tapuah to disarm her son.
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Original:  Eden's mother Debbie, speaking from the family home in Rishon Lezion was told that someone must be AWOL for 45 days to be officially considered a deserter and was advised to go herself to  Tapuah to disarm her son.
Revised:  Eden's mother Debbie, speaking from the family home in Rishon Lezion was told that someone must be AWOL for 45 days to be officially considered a deserter and was advised to go herself to Kfar Tapuah to disarm her son.
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Original:  Eden had recently become more fanatical and encountered writings on the Internet about revenge and zealotry in Judaism published by the outlawed  Kach group in The Way of the Torah.
Revised:  Eden had recently become more fanatical and encountered writings on the Internet about revenge and zealots in Judaism published by the outlawed Kach group in The Way of the Torah.
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Original:  When called up into the Israel Defence Forces (IDF) for basic training in May 2005 Natan-Zada went reluctantly, then refused to obey an order and was briefly imprisoned.
Revised:  When called up into the Israel Defense Forces (IDF) for basic training in May 2005 Natan-Zada went reluctantly, then refused to obey an order and was briefly imprisoned.
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Original:  The Israel government condemned the random shooting and mobilized troops in anticipation of rioting in the north of Israel.
Revised:  The Israeli government condemned the random shooting and mobilized troops in anticipation of rioting in the north of Israel.
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Original:  He moved to Kfar Tapuach, a West Bank Jewish settlement dominated by the militant Kach movement.
Revised:  He moved to Kfar Tapuach, a West Bank Jewish settlement dominated by the terrorist Kach movement.
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Original:  The Israel government condemned the random shooting and mobilized troops in anticipation of rioting in the north of Israel.
Revised:  The Israel government condemned the random shooting and mobilized troops in anticipation of rioting in northern Israel.
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Original: Icelandair airplain taking of from London Heathrow Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers, Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been hearse.
Revised: Icelandair airplane taking of from London Heathrow Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers, Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been hearse.
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Original:  British Airways airplain Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA, "This market has been growing rapidly.
Revised:  British Airways airplane Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA, "This market has been growing rapidly.
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Original:  The first flight is scheduled 26. mars 2006.
Revised:  The first flight is scheduled 26th March 2006.
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Original:  Iceland Express logo British Airways has reported the tickets will cost about ISK 22.990 ( EUR 291 )
Revised:  Iceland Express logo British Airways has reported the tickets will cost about EUR 291 )
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Original:  Iceland Express, low fare airline, ready to take on BA British Airways has reported the tickets will cost about EUR 291
Revised:  Iceland Express, low fare airline, ready to take on BA British Airways has reported the tickets will cost about € 291
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Original:  The first flight is scheduled 26th March 2006.
Revised:  The first flight is scheduled March 26, 2006.
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Original: Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers, Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been hearse.
Revised: Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers, Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce
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Original: The British airline British Airways reported they will start flying to Iceland from Gatwick airportnear London.
Revised: The airline British Airways reported they will start flying to Iceland from Gatwick airportnear London.
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Original: The British airline British Airways reported they will start flying to Iceland from Gatwick airportnear London.
Revised: The British airline British Airways have reported that they will start flying to Iceland from Gatwick airportnear London.
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Original:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers , Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce  BA to fly to Iceland Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA , "This market has been growing rapidly.
Revised:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers : Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce BA to fly to Iceland Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA , "This market has been growing rapidly.
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Original:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers , Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce  BA to fly to Iceland Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA , "This market has been growing rapidly.
Revised:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers , Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce . BA to fly to Iceland Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA , "This market has been growing rapidly.
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Original:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers , Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce  BA to fly to Iceland Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA , "This market has been growing rapidly.
Revised:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers , Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce BA to fly to Iceland Icelandair's PR, Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA , "This market has been growing rapidly.
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Original:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers , Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce  BA to fly to Iceland Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA , "This market has been growing rapidly.
Revised:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers , Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce BA to fly to Iceland Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson , said that Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA , "This market has been growing rapidly.
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Original:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers , Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce  BA to fly to Iceland Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA , "This market has been growing rapidly.
Revised:  Until now, only two airlines have been flying to and from Iceland with passengers , Icelandair, the oldest and biggest airline in Iceland, and Iceland Express, a recent low-fare airline and the competition between them has been fierce BA to fly to Iceland Icelandairs PR Guðjón Arngrímsson said Icelandair welcomes the competition and believes Icelandair can compete with BA : "This market has been growing rapidly.
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Original:  Iceland Express, low fare airline, ready to take on BA British Airways has reported the tickets will cost about €291
Revised:  Iceland Express, low fare airline, ready to take on BA British Airways have reported the tickets will cost about €291
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Original: An explosion and subsequent chemical fire at the Australian National University in Canberra, this afternoon caused up to AUS $1 million in damage and forced the evacuation of most of the main campus.
Revised: An explosion and subsequent chemical fire at the Australian National University this afternoon caused up to AUS $1 million in damage and forced the evacuation of most of the main campus.
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Original: An explosion and subsequent chemical fire at the Australian National University in Canberra, this afternoon caused up to AUS $1 million in damage and forced the evacuation of most of the main campus.
Revised: An explosion and subsequent chemical fire at the Australian National University in Canberra, this afternoon caused an estimated AUS $1 million in damage and forced the evacuation of most of the main campus.
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Original:  As the fire spread , and along with it, a cloud of potentially toxic smoke , a large number of fire personnel were called to the site and police, with limited success, attempted to cordon off access to the university.
Revised:  As the fire spread a cloud of potentially toxic smoke , a large number of fire personnel were called to the site and police, with limited success, attempted to cordon off access to the university.
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Original:  All students in the buildings were asked to leave the campus entirely.
Revised:  Students in the buildings were asked to leave the campus entirely.
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Original:  There was a great deal of confusion afterwards , as while police were able to clear the buildings successfully, they had some difficulty passing on the evacuation message to those already outside.
Revised:  There was a great deal of confusion afterwards . Police were able to clear the buildings successfully, they had some difficulty passing on the evacuation message to those already outside.
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Original:  There was a great deal of confusion afterwards , as while police were able to clear the buildings successfully, they had some difficulty passing on the evacuation message to those already outside.
Revised:  There was a great deal of confusion afterwards , as while police were able to clear the buildings successfully, but had some difficulty passing on the evacuation message to those already outside.
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Original:  There was a great deal of confusion afterwards , as while police were able to clear the buildings successfully, they had some difficulty passing on the evacuation message to those already outside.
Revised:  There was a great deal of confusion afterwards , as while police were able to clear the buildings successfully, they had some difficulty evacuating those who were already outside.
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Original:  While the email had suggested that only parts of the campus had been shut down, there  were reports of activities being cancelled at the other end of the campus late into the afternoon.
Revised:  While the email had suggested that only parts of the campus had been shut down, there There were reports of activities being cancelled at the other end of the campus late into the afternoon.
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Original: The US government today approved plans for a controversial wind power project off the coast of Cape Cod in Massachusetts, which, if built, would be the nation's first wind farm  offshore of the coast.
Revised: The US government today approved plans for a controversial wind power project off the coast of Cape Cod in Massachusetts, which, if built, would be the nation's first wind farm located offshore of the coast.
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Original:  He also commented that "Cape Wind is good for our environment and good for our energy needs," despite opposition from saome groups.
Revised:  He also commented that "Cape Wind is good for our environment and good for our energy needs," despite opposition from some groups.
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Original:  According to the leader of the Alliance to Protect Nantucket Sound, a group opposed to the wind farm's construction, said that numerous permits were being appealed, and close to dozen parties intend to sue the project, claiming it violates environmental regulations.
Revised:  According to the leader of the Alliance to Protect Nantucket Sound, a group opposed to the wind farm's construction, numerous permits related to the project were being appealed, and close to dozen parties intend to sue the project, claiming it violates environmental regulations.
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Original:  Opponents, which included deceased US Senator Edward Kennedy, claim it will wreck the beauty of the area , and will raise the costs of electricity in the area
Revised:  Opponents, which included deceased US Senator Edward Kennedy, claim it will destroy the natural beauty of the area , and will raise the costs of electricity in the area
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Original:  Opponents, which included deceased US Senator Edward Kennedy, claim it will wreck the beauty of the area , and will raise the costs of electricity in the area
Revised:  Opponents, which included deceased US Senator Edward Kennedy, claim it will wreck the beauty of the region , and will raise the costs of electricity in the area
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Original:  Opponents, which included deceased US Senator Edward Kennedy, claim it will destroy the natural beauty of the region, and will raise the costs of electricity in the area
Revised:  Opponents, which included deceased US Senator Ted Kennedy, claim it will destroy the natural beauty of the region, and will raise the costs of electricity in the area
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Original:  A map which shows the best wind power for the Cape Cod region Massachusetts governor Deval Patrick said that "America needs offshore wind power, and with this project, Massachusetts will lead the nation."
Revised:  Massachusetts governor Deval Patrick said that "America needs offshore wind power, and with this project, Massachusetts will lead the nation."
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Original: Protesters in Thailand clashed today with government police in a scene described as a "very tense and intense standoff," killing at least one soldier and wounding 18 more.
Revised: Protesters in Thailand clashed today with government police in a scene described as a "very tense and intense standoff," killing at least one soldier and wounding eighteen more.
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Original:  government forces were trying to disperse the protesters . Casualties of the fighting included one dead, a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire, and at least eighteen injured, including eight protesters.
Revised:  government forces were trying to disperse the demonstrators . Casualties of the fighting included one dead, a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire, and at least eighteen injured, including eight protesters.
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Original:  Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the crowd from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the protesters .
Revised:  Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the crowd from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the crowd .
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Original:  Largely rural and urban poor, they say that they will not leave until the prime minister of Thailand resigns and new elections are held.
Revised:  Largely rural and urban poor, they say that they will not leave until the Thai Prime Minister, Abhisit Vejjajiva, resigns and new elections are held.
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Original: Casualties of the fighting included one dead , a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire , and at least eighteen injured, including eight protesters . Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the crowd from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the crowd.
Revised: Casualties of the fighting included one dead - a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire , and at least eighteen injured, including eight protesters . Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the crowd from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the crowd.
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Original: Casualties of the fighting included one dead , a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire , and at least eighteen injured, including eight protesters . Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the crowd from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the crowd.
Revised: Casualties of the fighting included one dead , a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire - and at least eighteen injured, including eight protesters . Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the crowd from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the crowd.
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Original: Casualties of the fighting included one dead , a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire , and at least eighteen injured, including eight protesters . Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the crowd from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the crowd.
Revised: Casualties of the fighting included one dead , a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire , and at least eighteen injured, including eight demonstrators . Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the crowd from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the crowd.
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Original: Casualties of the fighting included one dead , a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire , and at least eighteen injured, including eight protesters . Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the crowd from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the crowd.
Revised: Casualties of the fighting included one dead , a soldier apparently killed by friendly fire , and at least eighteen injured, including eight protesters . Government forces had, according to reports, fired both into the air and into the protestors from behind defenses such as razor wire and concrete pilings in an attempt to disperse the crowd.
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Original:  Protesters have largely paralyzed the city of Bangkok for the past seven weeks in demonstrations that have killed at least 26 people.
Revised:  The demonstrators have largely paralyzed the city of Bangkok for the past seven weeks in demonstrations that have killed at least 26 people.
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Original:  Protesters have largely paralyzed the city of Bangkok for the past seven weeks in demonstrations that have killed at least 26 people.
Revised:  Protesters have largely paralyzed the city of Bangkok for the past seven weeks in protests that have killed at least 26 people.
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Original:  Largely rural and urban poor, they say that they will not leave until the Thai Prime Minister , Abhisit Vejjajiva, resigns and new elections are held .
Revised:  Largely rural and urban poor, they say they will not leave until the Thai Prime Minister , Abhisit Vejjajiva, resigns and new elections are held .
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Original:  Largely rural and urban poor, they say that they will not leave until the Thai Prime Minister , Abhisit Vejjajiva, resigns and new elections are held .
Revised:  Largely rural and urban poor, they say that they will not leave until the Thai prime minister , Abhisit Vejjajiva, resigns and new elections are held .
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Original: It ’ s reported that the younger brother entered the kitchen and removed a knife;
Revised: It ' s reported that the younger brother entered the kitchen and removed a knife;
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Original: It ’ s reported that the younger brother entered the kitchen and removed a knife;
Revised: It ’ s reported that the younger brother entered the kitchen and he took a knife;
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Original:  he then continued to stab his brother in the chest.
Revised:  he then stabbed his brother in the chest.
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Original:  Police have reported that the youth confessed to them saying that he said “ things had got out of control ” . If convicted the boy could face five years in prison.
Revised:  Chile police reported that the youth confessed to them saying that he said “ things had got out of control ” . If convicted the boy could face five years in prison.
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Original:  Police have reported that the youth confessed to them saying that he said “ things had got out of control ” . If convicted the boy could face five years in prison.
Revised:  Police have reported that the youth said that " things had got out of control ” . If convicted the boy could face five years in prison.
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Original:  Police have reported that the youth confessed to them saying that he said “ things had got out of control ” . If convicted the boy could face five years in prison.
Revised:  Police have reported that the youth confessed to them saying that he said “ things had got out of control " . If convicted the boy could face five years in prison.
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Original:  Police have reported that the youth confessed to them saying that he said “ things had got out of control ” . If convicted the boy could face five years in prison.
Revised:  Police have reported that the youth confessed to them saying that he said “ things had got out of control ” . If convicted , the boy should stay five years in prison.
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Original:  At the time of the attack she was visiting her home country
Revised:  At the time of the attack , the woman was visiting her home country
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