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Original:  Baqar Askary, in 1985 had initiated the publication of a monthly magazine, for public health awareness, in Urdu language, the “Family Doctor” . Early professional life He was elected President of Dow Medical College Student ’ s Union-1962-63, and President, National Student Federation, Pakistan for the period - 1963-65 , during which he successfully led students ’ movement for the achievement of better facilities and for raising the standard of education in the country.
Revised:  Baqar Askary, in 1985 had initiated the publication of a monthly magazine, for public health awareness, in Urdu language, the “Family Doctor” . Early professional life He was elected President of Dow Medical College Student ’ s Union-1962-63, and President, National Student Federation, Pakistan for the period - 1963-65 , during which he successfully led students ' movement for the achievement of better facilities and for raising the standard of education in the country.
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Original:  Successful student ’ s movements provided Karachi with a second medical college - Sindh Medical College at Jinnah Post Graduate Medical Centre, in the public sector and Dawood Engineering College in the private sector.
Revised:  Successful student ' s movements provided Karachi with a second medical college - Sindh Medical College at Jinnah Post Graduate Medical Centre, in the public sector and Dawood Engineering College in the private sector.
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Original:  Successful student ’ s movements provided Karachi with a second medical college - Sindh Medical College at Jinnah Post Graduate Medical Centre, in the public sector and Dawood Engineering College in the private sector.
Revised:  Successful student ’ s movements provided Karachi with a second medical college – Sindh Medical College at Jinnah Post Graduate Medical Centre, in the public sector and Dawood Engineering College in the private sector.
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Original:  The college is named "Fatima Jinnah Dental College" to pay respects and dedicated to Mohtarma Fatima Jinnah one of the pioneers of Pakistan and sister of Mohammad Ali Jinnah, the founder of Pakistan.
Revised:  The college is named "Fatima Jinnah Dental College" after Mohtarma Fatima Jinnah one of the pioneers of Pakistan and sister of Mohammad Ali Jinnah, the founder of Pakistan.
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Original:  During Baqar Askary's close association with Mohtarma Fatima Jinnah, who was herself a dentist, emphatically requested him for the establishment of a Dental College in Karachi.
Revised:  During Baqar Askary's close association with Mohtarma Fatima Jinnah, who was herself a dentist, requested him for the establishment of a Dental College in Karachi.
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Original:  This wish of Mohtarma, had remained with him as a sacred trust, over the years.
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Original:  It is a public charitable Trust, Syed Hashim Raza, a renounced civil servants and the administrator of the Estate of Mohammad Ali Jinnah, was its first chairman.
Revised:  It is a public charitable Trust, Syed Hashim Raza, a civil servant and the administrator of the Estate of Mohammad Ali Jinnah, was its first chairman.
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Original:  He also had the honour of leading the Pakistan delegation to the Wonca World Conference of Family Physicians at Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada, in 1992.
Revised:  He also led the Pakistan delegation to the Wonca World Conference of Family Physicians at Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada, in 1992.
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Original:  He was also appointed as member of the Legislative Council of Bombay by Lord George Sydenham Clarke, who was at that time Governor of Bombay, with whom he also shared close friendship . Chinubhai also served as the President of the Ahmadabad Mill Owner’s Association .
Revised:  He was also appointed as member of the Legislative Council of Bombay by Lord George Sydenham Clarke, who was at that time Governor of Bombay, with whom he also shared close friendship .
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Original: Sir Chinubhai Madhowlal Ranchhodlal, 1st Baronet of Shahpur , CIE, also spelled as Sir Chinubhai Madhowlal Runchorelal (26 May 1864 – 3 March 1916), commonly known as Sir Chinubhai Baronet, was the first Hindu Baronet of British India, textile mill owner and philanthropist from Ahmedabad, India.
Revised: Sir Chinubhai Madhowlal Ranchhodlal, 1st Baronet of Shahpur , also spelled as Sir Chinubhai Madhowlal Runchorelal (26 May 1864 – 3 March 1916), commonly known as Sir Chinubhai Baronet, was the first Hindu Baronet of British India, textile mill owner and philanthropist from Ahmedabad, India.
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Original: Sir Chinubhai  Madhavlal Ranchhodlal, 1st Baronet of Shahpur , also spelled as Sir Chinubhai Madhowlal Runchorelal (26 May 1864 – 3 March 1916), commonly known as Sir Chinubhai Baronet, was the first Hindu Baronet of British India, textile mill owner and philanthropist from Ahmedabad, India.
Revised: Sir Chinubhai Madhowlal Sir Chinubhai Madhavlal Ranchhodlal, 1st Baronet of Shahpur , also spelled as Sir Chinubhai Madhowlal Runchorelal (26 May 1864 – 3 March 1916), commonly known as Sir Chinubhai Baronet, was the first Hindu Baronet of British India, textile mill owner and philanthropist from Ahmedabad, India.
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Original: Hubasha was a one of the greatest Arab market at all, Islamic Studies Vol 7, p 219، It was in the territory of Bariq an Azdi tribe in Tihama, and it is at a distance of six days from Mecca.
Revised: Hubasha was one among the greatest marketplaces of Arabia. Islamic Studies Vol 7, p 219، It was in the territory of Bariq an Azdi tribe in Tihama, and it is at a distance of six days from Mecca.
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Original: Hubasha was a one of the greatest Arab market at all, Islamic Studies Vol 7, p 219، It was in the territory of Bariq an Azdi tribe in Tihama, and it is at a distance of six days from Mecca.
Revised: Hubasha was a one of the greatest Arab market at all, Islamic Studies Vol 7, p 219، It was in the territory of the Azdi tribe in Tihama, and it is at a distance of six days from Mecca.
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Original: Hubasha was a one of the greatest Arab market at all, Islamic Studies Vol 7, p 219، It was in the territory of Bariq an Azdi tribe in Tihama, and it is at a distance of six days from Mecca.
Revised: Hubasha was a one of the greatest Arab market at all, Islamic Studies Vol 7, p 219، It was in the territory of Bariq an Azdi tribe in Tihama, six days' journey from Mecca.
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Original: Meccan trade and the rise of Islam p123، It was the last of the Jahiliyyah (pre-Islamic Arabia) markets to be destroyed. the governor of Mecca would appoint a person to deal with it and would give him troops . the troops would stay in the market fore three days at the beginning of Rajab. things went on in this manner until the Azd killed a person from rich who had been appointed to be in charge of the market, in 197AH.
Revised: Meccan trade and the rise of Islam p123، It was the last of the Jahiliyyah (pre-Islamic Arabia) markets to be destroyed. For many years, it was overseen annually during the month of Rajab by troops appointed by the governor of Mecca would appoint a person to deal with it and would give him troops . the troops would stay in the market fore three days at the beginning of Rajab. things went on in this manner until the Azd killed a person from rich who had been appointed to be in charge of the market, in 197AH.
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Original:  Musa who had appointed that person, consulted the scholars of Mecca, who advised him to destroy the market.
Revised:  Musa , decided to destroy the market.
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Original: Jerusalem Studies in Arabic and Islam Vol. 9 p33،Meccan trade and Islam: problems of origin and structure, P 90، References See also Bariq Province of Bariq History of Bariq 
Revised: Jerusalem Studies in Arabic and Islam Vol. 9 p33،Meccan trade and Islam: problems of origin and structure, P 90، See also Bariq Province of Bariq History of Bariq 
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Original: Jerusalem Studies in Arabic and Islam Vol. 9 p33،Meccan trade and Islam: problems of origin and structure, P 90، References See also Bariq Province of Bariq History of Bariq 
Revised: Jerusalem Studies in Arabic and Islam Vol. 9 p33،Meccan trade and Islam: problems of origin and structure, P 90، References See also Bariq Province of Bariq History of Bariq References
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Original: Ramon del Fierro Magsaysay Sr. (August 31, 1907 – March 17, 1957) was a Filipino statesman who served as the seventh president of the Philippines, from December 30, 1953, until his death in an aircraft disaster .
Revised: Ramon del Fierro Magsaysay Sr. (August 31, 1907 – March 17, 1957) was a Filipino statesman who served as the seventh president of the Philippines, from December 30, 1953, until his death in an aircraft disaster on March 17, 1957.
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Original: Misys Profit Matrix 2013 SpeakersINDIA – THE NEXT DECADE Programme He is columnist with Mumbai MirrorMumbai Mirror Columnists He also writes at FirstPost, Business Standard, IBNLive, The Economist Times.
Revised: Misys Profit Matrix 2013 SpeakersINDIA – THE NEXT DECADE Programme He is columnist with Mumbai MirrorMumbai Mirror Columnists He also writes at FirstPost, Business Standard, IBNLive, The Economics Times.
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Original: Tech in Electrical Engineering from Indian Institute of Technology, Bombay .2009 DAAs - Dean Alumni and Corporate Relations (Dean ACR) He is an alumnus of Indian Institute of Management, Ahmedabad.
Revised: Tech in Electrical Engineering from Indian Institute of Technology, Bombay . He is an alumnus of Indian Institute of Management, Ahmedabad.
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Original:  Misys Profit Matrix 2013 SpeakersINDIA – THE NEXT DECADE Programme He is columnist with Mumbai MirrorMumbai Mirror Columnists He also writes at FirstPost, Business Standard, IBNLive, The Economics Times.
Revised:  INDIA – THE NEXT DECADE Programme He is columnist with Mumbai MirrorMumbai Mirror Columnists He also writes at FirstPost, Business Standard, IBNLive, The Economics Times.
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Original:  Misys Profit Matrix 2013 SpeakersINDIA – THE NEXT DECADE Programme He is columnist with Mumbai MirrorMumbai Mirror Columnists He also writes at FirstPost, Business Standard, IBNLive, The Economics Times.
Revised:  Misys Profit Matrix 2013 SpeakersINDIA – THE NEXT DECADE Programme He is columnist with Mumbai Mirror He also writes at FirstPost, Business Standard, IBNLive, The Economics Times.
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Original:  PhD, Page6 He is a B.
Revised:  He is a B.
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Original:   He was elected mayor in 1890 when he was only 23.
Revised:  Career He was elected mayor in 1890 when he was only 23.
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Original:   He died in Melbourne, Florida, on June 18, 1936.
Revised:  Death He died in Melbourne, Florida, on June 18, 1936.
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Original:  the earliest is that of J. de Bela of Zuberoa ... "
Revised:  the earliest is that of J. de Bela of Zuberoa "
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Original: Joubert Prinsloo Horn is a South African rugby union player currently playing with Rugby Pro D2 side Aviron Bayonnais .
Revised: Joubert Prinsloo Horn is a South African rugby union player currently playing with the .
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Original:  However, his return to South Africa was short-lived and he moved to French Fédérale 1 side Soyaux Angoulème XV Charente prior to the 2014–15 season.
Revised:  However, his return to South Africa was short-lived and he moved to French Fédérale 1 side Soyaux Angoulême XV Charente prior to the 2014–15 season.
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Original:  In September 2015, he signed with Aviron Bayonnais for the 2015-2016 season, replacing Mark Chisholm.
Revised:  In September 2015, he signed with Aviron Bayonnais for the 2015-16 season, replacing Mark Chisholm.
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Original:  His usual position is lock. Career
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Original:  His usual position is lock. Career
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Original: Christiaan Jacobus 'Jacques' Momberg (born February 18 , 1991) is a South African rugby union player, currently playing as a hooker for Italian National Championship of Excellence side Rovigo.
Revised: Christiaan Jacobus 'Jacques' Momberg (born 18 , 1991) is a South African rugby union player, currently playing as a hooker for Italian National Championship of Excellence side Rovigo.
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Original:  In 2013, he was included in a South Africa President's XV team that played in the 2013 IRB Tbilisi Cup and won the tournament after winning all three matches.
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Original:  Motivated by the opportunity to gain control over Mongolia and by the threat posed to them by a strong, unified Mongol state such as the Oirats threatened to form, the Qing sent their army north to subdue the Dzungars in 1690. 
Revised:  Motivated by the opportunity to gain control over Mongolia and by the threat posed to them by a strong, unified Mongol state such as the Oirats threatened to form, the Qing sent their army north to subdue the Dzungars in 1690. Periodt
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Original: Steenkamp was a member of the Leicester Tigers youth system before returning to his native South Africa and making his Pumas debut in 2005.
Revised: Steenkamp was a member of the Leicester Tigers youth system before returning to his native South Africa , where he has been playing for the since 2005.
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Original: Early Life and Politics Edwin Nii Lante Vanderpuye (born 11 June 1965) is a Ghanaian sports journalist and politician and the current Member of Parliament of the Odododiodoo constituency.
Revised:  Edwin Nii Lante Vanderpuye (born 11 June 1965) is a Ghanaian sports journalist and politician and the current Member of Parliament of the Odododiodoo constituency.
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Original:  He has served as Minister of Youth and Sports and as Deputy Minister of Trade and Industry in the John Mahama and John Atta Mills'government respectively .
Revised:  He served as Minister of Youth and Sports and as Deputy Minister of Trade and Industry in the John Mahama and John Atta Mills'government respectively .
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Original:  He has served as Minister of Youth and Sports and as Deputy Minister of Trade and Industry in the John Mahama and John Atta Mills'government respectively .
Revised:  He has served as Minister of Youth and Sports and as Deputy Minister of Trade and Industry in the John Dramani Mahama's government .
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Original:  He serves in Parliament as the ranking member on Local Government and Rural Development Committee and as member on the Prvileges committee and Appointments committee   .
Revised:  He serves in Parliament as the ranking member on Local Government and Rural Development Committee and as member on the Prvileges committee and Appointments committee . .
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Original: Edwin Nii Lante Vanderpuye (born 11 June 1965) is a Ghanaian sports journalist and politician and the current Member of Parliament of the Odododiodoo constituency.
Revised: Edwin Nii Lante Vanderpuye (born 11 June 1965) is a Ghanaian sports journalist and politician and the current Member of Parliament of the Odododiodio constituency.
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Original:  In December 2016 he was retained as the member of Parliament for the Odododiodoo Constituency with 36,606 votes representing 57.04\% against his closest contentor the New Patriotic Party whose candidate, had 26,671 votes representing 41.56\%.
Revised:  In December 2016 he was retained as the member of Parliament for the Odododiodio Constituency with 36,606 votes representing 57.04\% against his closest contentor the New Patriotic Party whose candidate, had 26,671 votes representing 41.56\%.
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Original:  In December 2016 he was retained as the member of Parliament for the Odododiodoo Constituency with 36,606 votes representing 57.04\% against his closest contentor the New Patriotic Party whose candidate, had 26,671 votes representing 41.56\%.
Revised:  In December 2016 he was retained as the member of Parliament for the Odododiodoo Constituency with 36,606 votes representing 57.04\% against his closest contender the New Patriotic Party whose candidate, had 26,671 votes representing 41.56\%.
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Original: Memeber of Parliament He was elected as MP during the 2012 elections, where he faced off against Victor Okaikoi of the New Patriotic Party.
Revised: Member of Parliament He was elected as MP during the 2012 elections, where he faced off against Victor Okaikoi of the New Patriotic Party.
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Original:  He serves in Parliament as the ranking member on Local Government and Rural Development Committee and as member on the Prvileges committee and Appointments committee.
Revised:  He serves in Parliament as the ranking member on Local Government and Rural Development Committee and as member on the Privileges committee and Appointments committee.
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Original:  promotes the welfare of the population and is environmentally URL URL In 2011 the Charter was adopted by the African Union Heads of State steering committee for the New Partnership for Africa's Development as a flagship Natural Resource Governance Programme starting in URL . The Charter document was initially written by a group of leading experts on natural resource governance including Paul Collier,
Revised:  promotes the welfare of the population and is environmentally URL In 2011 the Charter was adopted by the African Union Heads of State steering committee for the New Partnership for Africa's Development as a flagship Natural Resource Governance Programme starting in URL . The Charter document was initially written by a group of leading experts on natural resource governance including Paul Collier,
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Original:  promotes the welfare of the population and is environmentally URL URL In 2011 the Charter was adopted by the African Union Heads of State steering committee for the New Partnership for Africa's Development as a flagship Natural Resource Governance Programme starting in URL . The Charter document was initially written by a group of leading experts on natural resource governance including Paul Collier,
Revised:  promotes the welfare of the population and is environmentally URL URL In 2011 the Charter was adopted by the African Union Heads of State steering committee for the New Partnership for Africa's Development as a flagship Natural Resource Governance Programme starting in URL The Charter document was initially written by a group of leading experts on natural resource governance including Paul Collier,
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Original:  Michael Spence, Robert Conrad and Anthony Venables amongst other senior economists, lawyers and political URL . It received input from a range of stakeholders during a 12 month public consultation prior to the launch of the Charter in URL .
Revised:  Michael Spence, Robert Conrad and Anthony Venables amongst other senior economists, lawyers and political URL It received input from a range of stakeholders during a 12 month public consultation prior to the launch of the Charter in URL .
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Original:  Michael Spence, Robert Conrad and Anthony Venables amongst other senior economists, lawyers and political URL . It received input from a range of stakeholders during a 12 month public consultation prior to the launch of the Charter in URL .
Revised:  Michael Spence, Robert Conrad and Anthony Venables amongst other senior economists, lawyers and political URL . It received input from a range of stakeholders during a 12 month public consultation prior to the launch of the Charter in URL 
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Original:  leading to the publication of an assessment report with traffic light scoring according to the precepts of the URL The Charter document was initially written by a group of leading experts on natural resource governance including Paul Collier,
Revised:  leading to the publication of an assessment report with traffic light scoring according to the precepts of the Charter. The Charter document was initially written by a group of leading experts on natural resource governance including Paul Collier,
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Original: Economy Ben Ali with U.S. Secretary of State Colin Powell in 2004 Zine El Abidine Ben Ali in 2002 |left As president, Ben Ali instituted economic reforms that increased Tunisia's growth rate and foreign investment.
Revised: Economy Ben Ali with U.S. Secretary of State Colin Powell in 2004 Zine El Abidine Ben Ali |left As president, Ben Ali instituted economic reforms that increased Tunisia's growth rate and foreign investment.
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Original:  Nevertheless, after being chosen as one of a group of young officers, he was awarded training in France at the Ecole Spéciale Militaire de Saint-Cyr in Coëtquidan and the School of Applied Artillery in Châlons-sur-Marne, and also in the United States at the Senior Intelligence School in Maryland and the School for Anti-Aircraft Field Artillery in Texas.
Revised:  Nevertheless, after being chosen as one of a group of young officers, he was awarded training in France at the École Spéciale Militaire de Saint-Cyr in Coëtquidan and the School of Applied Artillery in Châlons-sur-Marne, and also in the United States at the Senior Intelligence School in Maryland and the School for Anti-Aircraft Field Artillery in Texas.
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Original: Economy Ben Ali with U.S. Secretary of State Colin Powell in 2004 Zine El Abidine Ben Ali in 2002|left As president, Ben Ali instituted economic reforms that increased Tunisia's growth rate and foreign investment.
Revised: Economy Ben Ali with U.S. Secretary of State Colin Powell in 2004 As president, Ben Ali instituted economic reforms that increased Tunisia's growth rate and foreign investment.
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Original:  On  7 November 1987 Morning , doctors attending to President Bourguiba filed an official medical report declaring him medically incapacitated and unable to fulfill the duties of the presidency.
Revised:  On the morning of 7 November 1987 Morning , doctors attending to President Bourguiba filed an official medical report declaring him medically incapacitated and unable to fulfill the duties of the presidency.
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Original:  On  7 November 1987 Morning , doctors attending to President Bourguiba filed an official medical report declaring him medically incapacitated and unable to fulfill the duties of the presidency.
Revised:  On 7 November 1987 , doctors attending to President Bourguiba filed an official medical report declaring him medically incapacitated and unable to fulfill the duties of the presidency.
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Original:  In conformity with Article 57 of the Tunisian Constitution , the peaceful transition occurred .
Revised:  Ben Ali’s assumption of the presidency was in conformity with Article 57 of the Tunisian Constitution , the peaceful transition occurred .
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Original:  In conformity with Article 57 of the Tunisian Constitution , the peaceful transition occurred .
Revised:  In conformity with Article 57 of the Tunisian Constitution .
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Original: Sir Chinubhai Madhowlal Ranchhodlal, 2nd Baronet of Shahpur, commonly known as Sir Girjaprasad Chinubhai Baronet ( 1906-1990) , was the 2nd of Runchorelal baronets, a businessman, an independence activist and social reformer from Ahmadabad, Gujarat, India.
Revised: Sir Chinubhai Madhowlal Ranchhodlal, 2nd Baronet of Shahpur, commonly known as Sir Girjaprasad Chinubhai Baronet ( 19 April 1906 – 1990) was an Indian businessman, an independence activist and social reformer from Ahmadabad, Gujarat, India.
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Original:  In 1924, he married Tanumati  daughter of Jahaverilal Mehta and had issues .
Revised:  In 1924, he married Tanumati , daughter of Jahaverilal Mehta and had issues .
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Original:  In 1924, he married Tanumati  daughter of Jahaverilal Mehta and had issues .
Revised:  In 1924, he married Tanumati daughter of Jahaverilal Mehta and had issue .
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