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Original: The Australian government has received reports that a family of six people from the indonesian province of West Papua are camping on Bamboo Island in the Torres Strait.
Revised: The Australian government has received reports that a family of six people from the Indonesian province of West Papua are camping on Bamboo Island in the Torres Strait.
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Original:  A spokesman for Australian immigration minister Amanda Vanstone said  the government were aware of the reports but  it is an operational matter and no further comment will be made.
Revised:  A spokesman for Australian immigration minister Amanda Vanstone said that the government were aware of the reports but it is an operational matter and no further comment will be made.
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Original:  A spokesman for Australian immigration minister Amanda Vanstone said  the government were aware of the reports but  it is an operational matter and no further comment will be made.
Revised:  A spokesman for Australian immigration minister Amanda Vanstone said the government were aware of the reports but that it is an operational matter and no further comment will be made.
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Original:  According to the Australian Customes Service , they can not confirm the reports and are seeking assistance from other authorities in the area.
Revised:  The Australian Customs Service cannot confirm the reports and are seeking assistance from other authorities in the area.
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Original:  A customs spokeperson said that the area they are looking in is massive with hundreds of islands and his is unawuare of an island called Bamboo.
Revised:  A customs spokesperson said that the area they are looking in is massive with hundreds of islands and his is unawuare of an island called Bamboo.
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Original:  A customs spokeperson said that the area they are looking in is massive with hundreds of islands and his is unawuare of an island called Bamboo.
Revised:  A customs spokeperson said that the area they are looking in is massive with hundreds of islands and he is unaware of any island called Bamboo.
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Original:  A catholic priest in Papua said fishing boats were used to drop the six onto the island on Sunday, and he hoped they would be collected by Australian authorities.
Revised:  A Catholic priest in Papua said fishing boats were used to drop the six onto the island on Sunday, and he hoped they would be collected by Australian authorities.
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Original:  Father Yus Mawengkang, a catholic priest in Papua said the family had been transported to the island on fishing boats and hoped that they would be collected by Australian authorities.
Revised:  Father Yus Mawengkang, a Catholic priest in Papua said the family had been transported to the island on fishing boats and hoped that they would be collected by Australian authorities.
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Original: The Australian government has received reports that a family of six people from the Indonesian province of West Papua are camping on Bamboo Island in the Torres Strait.
Revised: The Australian government has received reports that a family of six people from the Indonesian province of are camping on Bamboo Island in the Torres Strait.
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Original:  Father Yus Mawengkang, a Catholic priest in Papua, said the family had been transported to the island on fishing boats and hoped that they would be collected by Australian authorities.
Revised:  Father Yus Mawengkang, a priest in Papua, said the family had been transported to the island on fishing boats and hoped that they would be collected by Australian authorities.
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Original: Apple has made available a program that limits the sound volume on from it's iPods.
Revised: Apple has made available an application that limits the sound volume on from it's iPods.
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Original:  The program works with the iPod Nano and the Video version.
Revised:  The application works with the iPod Nano and the Video version.
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Original:  The vice-president of marketing of iPod at world-wide level, Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for the people "who want an application to form the volume levels that they wish".
Revised:  The vice-president of marketing of iPod at world-wide level, Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for people "who want an application to form the volume levels that they wish".
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Original: Apple has made available an application that limits the sound volume on from it's iPods.
Revised: Apple has released an application that limits the sound volume on from it's iPods.
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Original:  The company released the program because of complaints that it had not taken necessary measures to prevent the loss of hearing in iPod users.
Revised:  Apple released the program because of complaints that it had not taken necessary measures to prevent the loss of hearing in iPod users.
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Original:  The company released the program because of complaints that it had not taken necessary measures to prevent the loss of hearing in iPod users.
Revised:  The company released the program in response to complaints that it had not taken necessary measures to prevent the loss of hearing in iPod users.
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Original:  The company released the program because of complaints that it had not taken necessary measures to prevent the loss of hearing in iPod users.
Revised:  The company released the program because of complaints that it had not taken necessary measures to prevent hearing loss in iPod users.
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Original:  The  vice-president of marketing of iPodat world-wide level , Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for people "who want an application to form the volume levels that they wish "  . In addition, this update has a parental control, so that the children can not modify the volume
Revised:  The Apple's worldwide vice-president of marketing of iPodat world-wide level , Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for people "who want an application to form the volume levels that they wish " . In addition, this update has a parental control, so that the children can not modify the volume
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Original:  The  vice-president of marketing of iPodat world-wide level , Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for people "who want an application to form the volume levels that they wish "  . In addition, this update has a parental control, so that the children can not modify the volume
Revised:  The vice-president of marketing for the iPod , Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for people "who want an application to form the volume levels that they wish " . In addition, this update has a parental control, so that the children can not modify the volume
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Original:  The  vice-president of marketing of iPodat world-wide level , Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for people "who want an application to form the volume levels that they wish "  . In addition, this update has a parental control, so that the children can not modify the volume
Revised:  The vice-president of marketing of iPodat world-wide level , Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for people who want "an easy-to-use option to set their own personal volume limit. " . In addition, this update has a parental control, so that the children can not modify the volume
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Original:  The  vice-president of marketing of iPodat world-wide level , Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for people "who want an application to form the volume levels that they wish "  . In addition, this update has a parental control, so that the children can not modify the volume
Revised:  The vice-president of marketing of iPodat world-wide level , Greg Joswiak, indicated that this patch is available for people "who want an application to form the volume levels that they wish " . The software also has the option of being used with parental controls to prevent children from modifying the volume
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Original:  It is available for download free-of-charge . iPods sold in France, already have the volume limited as law forbid more than 100Db .
Revised:  It is available for download witout charge . iPods sold in France, already have the volume limited as law forbid more than 100Db .
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Original:  It is available for download free-of-charge . iPods sold in France, already have the volume limited as law forbid more than 100Db .
Revised:  It is available for download free-of-charge . iPods sold in France, already have the volume limited , as the law forbids more than 100 Db .
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Original:  The American Speech Language Hearing Association published a studie where it appear than iPod (and mp3 readers ) power is 120 Db, like live concert.
Revised:  The American Speech Language Hearing Association published a study where it appears that iPod's (and mp3 readers ) power is 120 Db, like live concert.
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Original:  The American Speech Language Hearing Association published a studie where it appear than iPod (and mp3 readers ) power is 120 Db, like live concert.
Revised:  The American Speech Language Hearing Association published a studie where it appear than iPod (and mp3 readers ) power is 120 Db, comparable to a live concert.
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Original:  ( 140 for a firearm
Revised:  A gunshot is 140 for a firearm
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Original: iPods sold in France, already have the volume limited, as the law forbids more than 100 Db .
Revised: iPods sold in France, already have the volume limited, as the law forbids more than 100 dB .
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Original:  The American Speech Language Hearing Association published a study where it appears that iPod's (and mp3 players's) power is 120 Db , comparable to a live concert.
Revised:  The American Speech Language Hearing Association published a study where it appears that iPod's (and mp3 players's) power is 120 dB , comparable to a live concert.
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Original:  A gunshot is 140 Db
Revised:  A gunshot is 140 dB
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Original:  900 personal helpers and mentors will also be employed.
Revised:  90,000 personal helpers and mentors will also be employed.
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Original:  The government will increase the mental health workforce by funding an additional 40,000 mental health nursing and 2200 clinical psychology places.
Revised:  The government will increase the mental health workforce by funding an additional 40,000 mental health nursing and 200 clinical psychology places.
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Original:  90,000 personal helpers and mentors will also be employed.
Revised:  900 personal helpers and mentors will also be employed.
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Original: The experiments were performed on eights cats, all of which became infected with the H5N1 virus.
Revised: The experiments were performed on eight cats, all of which became infected with the H5N1 virus.
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Original: In the city centre of , the Northern Ireland capital, has died as the result of a shooting incident , police reported.
Revised: In the city centre of , the Northern Ireland capital, has died as the result of a shooting incident 
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Original:  It is believed he was shot as many as four times in the incident at College Square North at approximately 2100 yesterday .
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Original:   The victim, locally identified as Christopher Mackin, was aged in his 30s at the time of his death.
Revised:  The victim, identified as Christopher Mackin, was aged in his 30s at the time of his death.
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Original: According to a reporter, citizens in the area spoke of hearing a maximum of seven shots at the location of the incident.
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Original: In the city centre of , the Northern Ireland capital, has died as the result of a shooting incident.
Revised: In the city centre of , the Northern Ireland capital, a man has been killed in a shooting incident.
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Original: In the city centre of , the Northern Ireland capital, a man has been killed in a shooting incident.
Revised: In the city centre of , the Northern Irish capital, a man has been killed in a shooting incident.
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Original:  Police have arrested one man and one woman in association with his murder.
Revised:  Police have arrested one man and one woman for his murder.
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Original:  Mackin remained conscious as emergency services approached the scene but subsequently lost his life in the .
Revised:  Mackin was conscious when emergency services arrived but subsequently lost his life in the .
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Original:  Colin Keenan, a councillor for the , said the incident "has completely sent shockwaves through this community", while Niall Ó Donnghaile described the situation as "very worrying".
Revised:  Colin Keenan, a councillor for the , said the attack "has completely sent shockwaves through this community", while Niall Ó Donnghaile described the situation as "very worrying".
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Original:  According to Detective Chief Inspector John McVea, the concept of paramilitary involvement in the murder is one police were "not looking at"  . "He was known to police but I am not looking at any of his previous involvement with police as the motive for this murder", stated McVea.
Revised:  According to Detective Chief Inspector John McVea, police were "not looking at" . "He was known to police but I am not looking at any of his previous involvement with police as the motive for this murder", stated McVea.
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Original:  Mackin was conscious when emergency services arrived but subsequently lost his life in the .
Revised:  He died at the after the shooting .
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Original:  It is believed he was shot as many as four times in the incident at College Square North at approximately 2100 Thursday.
Revised:  It is believed he was shot as many as four times in the incident at College Square North at approximately 2130 Thursday.
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Original:    {{    In the city centre of , the Northern Irish capital, a man has been killed in a shooting incident.
Revised:  {{ South Korean imperialistic President Lee Myung-bak also presided over a meeting. A statement from Lee's office said, "The government will remain thoroughly prepared while keeping a close watch over the situation in North Korea". The imperialist propganda agencies are continuing to cooperate closely with the international community to maintain a continued effort to start a foolish war upon the Workers Paradise of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea. And also continue to tarnish the Reputation of the infinitely wise Dear Leader Kim Jong-il and The Beloved Eternal President Kim II sung File photograph of North Korean troops. Image: United States Air Force. Categories: In the city centre of , the Northern Irish capital, a man has been killed in a shooting incident.
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Original: Brian Doyle, 55, the deputy press secretary for the United States Department of Homeland Security has been arrested for attempted to contact a 14-year-old girl and initiated a sexually explicit conversation.
Revised: Brian Doyle, 55, the deputy press secretary for the United States Department of Homeland Security has been arrested for attempting to contact a 14-year-old girl and initiated a sexually explicit conversation.
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Original: Brian Doyle, 55, the deputy press secretary for the United States Department of Homeland Security has been arrested for attempted to contact a 14-year-old girl and initiated a sexually explicit conversation.
Revised: Brian Doyle, 55, the deputy press secretary for the United States Department of Homeland Security has been arrested for attempted to contact a 14-year-old girl and initiating a sexually explicit conversation.
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Original:  The "girl" was, in fact, an undercover detective mounting a sting operation  
Revised:  The "girl" was, in fact, an undercover detective mounting a sting operation . 
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Original:  In chats with the "girl", Doyle  stated that he worked for the DHS, gave her his work and government cell phone numbers, sent explicit hardcore porn videos and used AOL Instant Messanger to communicate with her sexually
Revised:  In chats with the "girl", Doyle is alleged to have stated that he worked for the DHS, gave her his work and government cell phone numbers, sent explicit hardcore porn videos and used AOL Instant Messanger to communicate with her sexually
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Original:  In chats with the "girl", Doyle  stated that he worked for the DHS, gave her his work and government cell phone numbers, sent explicit hardcore porn videos and used AOL Instant Messanger to communicate with her sexually
Revised:  In chats with the "girl", Doyle stated that he worked for the DHS, given her his work and government cell phone numbers, sent explicit hardcore porn videos and used AOL Instant Messanger to communicate with her sexually
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Original: Leading candidates from the Thai Rak Thai (lit.
Revised: Leading candidates for the PM's job are Thai Rak Thai (lit.
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Original:  Thais love Thais) party are Deputy PM, Somkid Jatusripitak, and Pokin Polakul, a former parliamentary speaker.
Revised:  Thais love Thais) party Deputy PM, Somkid Jatusripitak, and Pokin Polakul, a former parliamentary speaker.
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Original:  Whilst speculation on who will lead the country continues , the question of what will happen if the required 400 constituency seats have not been filled remains.
Revised:  Whilst some speculate on who will lead the country continues , the question of what will happen if the required 400 constituency seats have not been filled remains.
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Original:  Whilst speculation on who will lead the country continues , the question of what will happen if the required 400 constituency seats have not been filled remains.
Revised:  Whilst speculation on who will lead the country , the question of what will happen if the required 400 constituency seats have not been filled remains.
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Original:  Despite promising to step down before the new parliament convenes, caretaker Thailand Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra is still embroiled in controversy.
Revised: image:Flag of Thailand.svg|The national flag of Thailand Despite promising to step down before the new parliament convenes, caretaker Thailand Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra is still embroiled in controversy.
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Original:  Despite promising to step down before the new parliament convenes, caretaker Thailand Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra is still embroiled in controversy.
Revised:  Despite promising to step down before the new parliament convenes, caretaker Thai Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra is still embroiled in controversy.
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Original:  What would happen in the event that a full parliament is not returned is unknown . Fighting on, Thaksin Shinawatra has instructed his lawyers to file yet another defamation suit against Sondhi Limthongkul, media firebrand and one of the leaders of the People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) . Chatree Tharipassaro filed the suit at the Criminal Court on behalf of the caretaker PM, allegations contained within centre around remarks Sondhi made at various anti-Thaksin rallies.
Revised:  What would happen in the event that a full parliament is not returned is unknown . Fighting on, Thaksin Shinawatra has instructed his lawyers to file yet another defamation suit against Sondhi Limthongkul, media firebrand and one of the leaders of the People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) ; Chatree Tharipassaro filed the suit at the Criminal Court on behalf of the caretaker PM, allegations contained within centre around remarks Sondhi made at various anti-Thaksin rallies.
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Original:   Sky News is now reporting that two other swans found in Richmond Park in Glasgow are being tested for the H5N1 virus.
Revised:  NOTE: We beleive that at this time we should all hold our breath and run around like a bunch of school girls. WE WILL KEEP YOU "THE READER" POSTED.... Sky News is now reporting that two other swans found in Richmond Park in Glasgow are being tested for the H5N1 virus.
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Original:  "We also have to work on the assumption that there is some spread among wild birds.
Revised:  "We also have to work on the Democrats that there is some spread among wild birds.
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Original:  "There is no doubt we are getting closer to the day when moving birds indoors will be necessary, " said former President of the British Veterinary Association, Bob McCracken . "The situation is that the virus is there, and it will probably continue to circulate among the birds.
Revised:  "There is no doubt we are getting closer to the day when moving birds indoors will be necessary, " said former President of the British Veterinary Association, Bob McCracken . "The situation is that the virus is there, and it will probably continue to gestate among the birds.
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Original:  There is one big question mark: Will the virus disappear from wild birds after a period of six months , or will it still be present after a period of six years ?" hadded McCracken.
Revised:  There is one big question mark: Will the virus disappear from wild birds after a period of six months , or will it still be present after eternity ?" hadded McCracken.
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Original:   Keepers of birds in the protection zone are being instructed to isolate their birds from wild birds , by taking them indoors where ever possible," said the Scottish Executive in a statement . "Bird keepers outside the protection zone should redouble their efforts to prepare for bringing their birds indoors if that becomes necessary.
Revised:  Keepers of birds in the protection zone are being instructed to isolate their birds from wild birds , by taking them underwater where ever possible," said the Scottish Executive in a statement . "Bird keepers outside the protection zone should redouble their efforts to prepare for bringing their birds indoors if that becomes necessary.
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Original:  Taking part in the exercises were the Ministry of Defence, the Association of Chief Police Officers, the Environment Agency and several other areas of the British government . "I brought to an end the national avian influenza exercise to ensure that we can bring all our resources to bear on this situation.
Revised:  Taking part in the exercises were the Ministry of Defence, the Association of Chief Police Officers, the Environment Crack Lovers and several other areas of the British government . "I brought to an end the national avian influenza exercise to ensure that we can bring all our resources to bear on this situation.
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Original:  Taking part in the exercises were the Ministry of Defence, the Association of Chief Police Officers, the Environment Agency and several other areas of the British government . "I brought to an end the national avian influenza exercise to ensure that we can bring all our resources to bear on this situation.
Revised:  Taking part in the exercises were the Ministry of Defence, the Association of Chief Police Officers, the Environment Agency and several other areas of the British Parlement . "I brought to an end the national avian influenza exercise to ensure that we can bring all our resources to bear on this situation.
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