wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The gold mining was dominated by immigrants from the British Isles and the British West Indies , giving an appearance of almost creating an English colony on Venezuelan territory .
Revised:  The immigrants who came to the gold mines in Venezuela were mostly from the British Isles and the British West Indies , giving an appearance of almost creating an English colony on Venezuelan territory .
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Original:  The gold mining was dominated by immigrants from the British Isles and the British West Indies , giving an appearance of almost creating an English colony on Venezuelan territory .
Revised:  The gold mining was dominated by immigrants from the British Isles and the British West Indies .
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Original:  upright=1.
Revised: hello kitty is better than you. upright=1.
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Original: No gold or lost city was ever found , however Raleigh returned to England and subsequently exaggerated his account.
Revised: No gold or lost city was ever found ; however, Raleigh returned to England and subsequently exaggerated his account.
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Original: Ambassador to Poland Likambe became Zaire's ambassador to Poland in 1992, at a time when Zaire's economy was struggling and there was little funds available for diplomats.
Revised: Ambassador to Poland Likambe became Zaire's ambassador to Poland in 1992, at a time when Zaire's economy was struggling and there was little funding available for diplomats.
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Original: Norse settlement Europeans  became aware of Greenland's existence , probably in the early 10th century, when Gunnbjörn Ulfsson,  sailing from Norway to Iceland, was blown off course by a storm and sighted some islands off Greenland.
Revised: Norse settlement Europeans probably became aware of Greenland's existence , probably in the early 10th century, when Gunnbjörn Ulfsson, sailing from Norway to Iceland, was blown off course by a storm and sighted some islands off Greenland.
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Original: Norse settlement Europeans  became aware of Greenland's existence , probably in the early 10th century, when Gunnbjörn Ulfsson,  sailing from Norway to Iceland, was blown off course by a storm and sighted some islands off Greenland.
Revised: Norse settlement Europeans became aware of Greenland's existence in the early 10th century, when Gunnbjörn Ulfsson, sailing from Norway to Iceland, was blown off course by a storm and sighted some islands off Greenland.
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Original: Norse settlement Europeans  became aware of Greenland's existence , probably in the early 10th century, when Gunnbjörn Ulfsson,  sailing from Norway to Iceland, was blown off course by a storm and sighted some islands off Greenland.
Revised: Norse settlement Europeans became aware of Greenland's existence , probably in the early 10th century, after Gunnbjörn Ulfsson, sailing from Norway to Iceland, was blown off course by a storm and sighted some islands off Greenland.
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Original: Norse settlement Europeans  became aware of Greenland's existence , probably in the early 10th century, when Gunnbjörn Ulfsson,  sailing from Norway to Iceland, was blown off course by a storm and sighted some islands off Greenland.
Revised: Norse settlement Europeans became aware of Greenland's existence , probably in the early 10th century, when Gunnbjörn Ulfsson, while sailing from Norway to Iceland, was blown off course by a storm and sighted some islands off Greenland.
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Original:  During the 980s , explorers led by Erik the Red set out from Iceland and reached the southwest coast of Greenland , found the region uninhabited, and subsequently settled there.
Revised:  During the 980s explorers led by Erik the Red set out from Iceland and reached the southwest coast of Greenland , found the region uninhabited, and subsequently settled there.
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Original:  During the 980s , explorers led by Erik the Red set out from Iceland and reached the southwest coast of Greenland , found the region uninhabited, and subsequently settled there.
Revised:  During the 980s , explorers led by Erik the Red set out from Iceland and reached the southwest coast of Greenland . They found the region uninhabited, and subsequently settled there.
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Original:  Erik named the island Greenland (Grœnland in Old Norse, Grænland in modern Icelandic, Grønland in modern Danish and Norwegian).
Revised:  Erik named the island "Greenland" (Grœnland in Old Norse, Grænland in modern Icelandic, Grønland in modern Danish and Norwegian).
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Original: The Fate of Greenland's Vikings This date has been approximately confirmed by radiocarbon dating of remains at the first settlement at Brattahlid (now Qassiarsuk) , which yielded a date of about 1000.
Revised: The Fate of Greenland's Vikings Radiocarbon dating of remains at the first settlement at Brattahlid (now Qassiarsuk) , which yielded a date of about 1000.
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Original:  According to the sagas, it was also in the year 1000 that Erik's son, Leif Eirikson, left the settlement to explore the regions around Vinland, which historians generally assume to have been located in what is now Newfoundland.
Revised:  According to the sagas, in the year 1000 that Erik's son, Leif Eirikson, left the settlement to explore the regions around Vinland, which historians generally assume to have been located in what is now Newfoundland.
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Original:  According to the sagas, it was also in the year 1000 that Erik's son, Leif Eirikson, left the settlement to explore the regions around Vinland, which historians generally assume to have been located in what is now Newfoundland.
Revised:  According to the sagas, it was also in the year 1000 Erik's son, Leif Eirikson, left the settlement to explore the regions around Vinland, which historians generally assume to have been located in what is now Newfoundland.
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Original:  According to the sagas, it was also in the year 1000 that Erik's son, Leif Eirikson, left the settlement to explore the regions around Vinland, which historians generally assume to have been located in what is now Newfoundland.
Revised:  According to the sagas, it was also in the year 1000 that Erik's son, Leif Eirikson, left the settlement to explore the regions around Vinland, which historians generally assume to have been located in present-day Newfoundland.
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Original:  It is possible , that the bottom  of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub as well as surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush  as the Qinngua Valley currently is  , but this hasn't been determined yet.
Revised:  It is possible that the bottom of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub as well as surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush as the Qinngua Valley currently is , but this hasn't been determined yet.
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Original:  It is possible , that the bottom  of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub as well as surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush  as the Qinngua Valley currently is  , but this hasn't been determined yet.
Revised:  It is possible , that the bottom lands of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub as well as surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush as the Qinngua Valley currently is , but this hasn't been determined yet.
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Original:  It is possible , that the bottom  of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub as well as surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush  as the Qinngua Valley currently is  , but this hasn't been determined yet.
Revised:  It is possible , that the bottom of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub and surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush as the Qinngua Valley currently is , but this hasn't been determined yet.
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Original:  It is possible , that the bottom  of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub as well as surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush  as the Qinngua Valley currently is  , but this hasn't been determined yet.
Revised:  It is possible , that the bottom of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub as well as surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush ( as the Qinngua Valley currently is , but this hasn't been determined yet.
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Original:  It is possible , that the bottom  of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub as well as surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush  as the Qinngua Valley currently is  , but this hasn't been determined yet.
Revised:  It is possible , that the bottom of the southern fjords at that time were covered by highgrown shrub as well as surrounded by hills covered with grass and brush as the Qinngua Valley currently is ) , but this hasn't been determined yet.
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Original:  If the presumption is true then the Norse probably cleared the landscape by felling trees to use as building material and  fuel, and by allowing their sheep and goats to graze there in both summer and winter.
Revised:  If the presumption is true then the Norse probably cleared the landscape by felling trees to use as building material and as fuel, and by allowing their sheep and goats to graze there in both summer and winter.
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Original:  The occurring soil erosion could have been an important factor in the demise of the colonies, as the land was stripped of its natural cover.
Revised:  Any resultant soil erosion could have been an important factor in the demise of the colonies, as the land was stripped of its natural cover.
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Original:  The occurring soil erosion could have been an important factor in the demise of the colonies, as the land was stripped of its natural cover.
Revised:  The occurring soil erosion could have become an important factor in the demise of the colonies, as the land was stripped of its natural cover.
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Original:  Archeologists have identified the ruins of approximately 620 farms: 500 in the Eastern Settlement, 95 in the Western Settlement, and 20 in the Middle  . upright=1.1|Summer on the Greenland coast The economy of the Norse Greenlanders depended on a combination of pastoral farming with hunting and some fishing.
Revised:  Archeologists have identified the ruins of approximately 620 farms: 500 in the Eastern Settlement, 95 in the Western Settlement, and 20 in the Middle Settlement . upright=1.1|Summer on the Greenland coast The economy of the Norse Greenlanders depended on a combination of pastoral farming with hunting and some fishing.
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Original:  Both individual farmers and groups of farmers organised summer trips to the more northerly Disko Bay area  where they hunted walruses, narwhals and polar bears for their skins, hides and ivory.
Revised:  Both individual farmers and groups of farmers organised summer trips to the more northerly Disko Bay area , where they hunted walruses, narwhals and polar bears for their skins, hides and ivory.
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Original:  Besides being used to make garments and shoes, these resources also functioned as a form of currency, as well as making up the most important export commodities.
Revised:  Besides their use in making garments and shoes, these resources also functioned as a form of currency, as well as making up the most important export commodities.
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Original:  Besides being used to make garments and shoes, these resources also functioned as a form of currency, as well as making up the most important export commodities.
Revised:  Besides being used to make garments and shoes, these resources also functioned as a form of currency, as well as providing the most important export commodities.
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Original: Viking Age Greenland Ancient History Encyclopedia The  settlements carried on a trade  in ivory from walrus tusks with Europe , as well as exporting rope, sheep, seals, wool and cattle hides (according to one 13th-century account).
Revised: Viking Age Greenland Ancient History Encyclopedia The settlements carried on a trade with Europe in ivory from walrus tusks with Europe , as well as exporting rope, sheep, seals, wool and cattle hides (according to one 13th-century account).
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Original: Viking Age Greenland Ancient History Encyclopedia The  settlements carried on a trade  in ivory from walrus tusks with Europe , as well as exporting rope, sheep, seals, wool and cattle hides (according to one 13th-century account).
Revised: Viking Age Greenland Ancient History Encyclopedia The settlements carried on a trade in ivory from walrus tusks , as well as exporting rope, sheep, seals, wool and cattle hides (according to one 13th-century account).
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Original:  Trade ships from Iceland and Norway traveled to Greenland every year and would sometimes overwinter in Greenland.
Revised:  For a time, trade ships from Iceland and Norway traveled to Greenland every year and would sometimes overwinter in Greenland.
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Original:  In 1379 , the Inuit attacked the Eastern Settlement, killed 18 men and captured two boys and a woman.
Revised:  In 1379 Inuit attacked the Eastern Settlement, killed 18 men and captured two boys and a woman.
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Original:  In 1402–1404 , the Black Death hit Iceland for the first time and killed approximately half the population there - but there is no evidence that it reached Greenland.
Revised:  In 1402–1404 the Black Death hit Iceland for the first time and killed approximately half the population there - but there is no evidence that it reached Greenland.
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Original:  There is correspondence between the Pope and the Biskop Bertold af Garde  from the same year.
Revised:  Correspondence between the Pope and the Biskop Bertold af Garde from the same year.
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Original:  There is correspondence between the Pope and the Biskop Bertold af Garde  from the same year.
Revised:  There is correspondence between the Pope and the Biskop Bertold af Garde dates from the same year.
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Original:  Two mathematical manuscripts containing the second chart of the Claudius Clavus map from his journey to Greenland , where he himself mapped the area , were found during the late 20th century by the Danish scholars Bjönbo and Petersen .
Revised:  Two mathematical manuscripts containing the second chart of the Claudius Clavus map from his journey to Greenland ( where he himself mapped the area , were found during the late 20th century by the Danish scholars Bjönbo and Petersen .
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Original:  Two mathematical manuscripts containing the second chart of the Claudius Clavus map from his journey to Greenland , where he himself mapped the area , were found during the late 20th century by the Danish scholars Bjönbo and Petersen .
Revised:  Two mathematical manuscripts containing the second chart of the Claudius Clavus map from his journey to Greenland , where he himself mapped the area ) .
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Original: The first humans are thought to have arrived in Greenland around 2500 BC.
Revised: Dont block me plsThe first humans are thought to have arrived in Greenland around 2500 BC.
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Original: Dont block me plsThe first humans are thought to have arrived in Greenland around 2500 BC.
Revised: The first humans are thought to have arrived in Greenland around 2500 BC.
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Original: In a letter dated 1448 from Rome, Pope Nicholas V instructed the bishops of Skálholt and Hólar (the two Icelandic episcopal sees) to provide the inhabitants of Greenland with priests and a bishop, the latter of which they had not had in the 30 years since a purported attack by heathens who destroyed most of the churches and took the population prisoner.
Revised: In a letter dated 1448 from Rome, Pope Nicholas V instructed the bishops of Skálholt and Hólar (the two Icelandic episcopal sees) to provide the inhabitants of Greenland with priests and a bishop, the latter of which they had not had in the 30 years since a purported attack by "heathens" who destroyed most of the churches and took the population prisoner.
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Original: The Late Dorset culture inhabited Greenland until the early fourteenth URL This culture was primarily located in the northwest of Greenland, far from the Norse who lived around the southern coasts.
Revised: The Late Dorset culture inhabited Greenland until the early fourteenth century. This culture was primarily located in the northwest of Greenland, far from the Norse who lived around the southern coasts.
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Original:  The FDA considers it to be a first-in-class medication.
Revised:  The U.S. Food and Drug Administration (FDA) considers it to be a first-in-class medication.
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Original: Crizanlizumab, ( brand name Adakveo ) , is a monoclonal antibody  developed by Novartis targeted towards P-selectin.
Revised: Crizanlizumab, sold under the brand name Adakveo ) , is a monoclonal antibody developed by Novartis targeted towards P-selectin.
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Original: Crizanlizumab, ( brand name Adakveo ) , is a monoclonal antibody  developed by Novartis targeted towards P-selectin.
Revised: Crizanlizumab, ( brand name Adakveo , is a monoclonal antibody developed by Novartis targeted towards P-selectin.
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Original: Crizanlizumab, ( brand name Adakveo ) , is a monoclonal antibody  developed by Novartis targeted towards P-selectin.
Revised: Crizanlizumab, ( brand name Adakveo ) , is a monoclonal antibody medication developed by Novartis targeted towards P-selectin.
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Original:  It was announced by the company as an effective drug to prevent vaso-occlusive crisis in patients with sickle cell anemia.
Revised:  It has been approved by the US FDA as an effective drug to prevent vaso-occlusive crisis in patients with sickle cell anemia.
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Original:  The result of the Phase II SUSTAIN clinical trial was published in December 2016.
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Original: Crizanlizumab, sold under the brand name Adakveo, is a monoclonal antibody medication developed by Novartis targeted towards P-selectin.
Revised: Crizanlizumab, sold under the brand name Adakveo, is a monoclonal antibody medication that binds to P-selectin.
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Original:  It has been approved by the US FDA as an effective drug to prevent vaso-occlusive crisis in patients with sickle cell anemia.
Revised:  It is a drug used to reduce the frequency of vaso-occlusive crisis in patients with sickle cell anemia.
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Original:  Crizanlizumab is a treatment to reduce the frequency of vaso-occlusive crisis – a common and painful complication of sickle cell disease that occurs when blood circulation is obstructed by sickled red blood cells – for those 16 years and older .
Revised:  Vaso-occlusive crisis is a common and painful complication of sickle cell disease that occurs when blood circulation is obstructed by sickled red blood cells – for those 16 years and older .
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Original:  There are ""telehealth "" products in the health care industry such as automated or electronic pill boxes that function to alert the patients when it is time to take their medications.
Revised:  There are telehealth products in the health care industry such as automated or electronic pill boxes that function to alert the patients when it is time to take their medications.
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Original:  Types of Providers - Pharmacy's - Mail out companies who ship equipment to customers - Full Service that provide installation, ongoing education and periodic testing programs (Automated Security Alert Inc.)
Revised:  Types of Providers - Pharmacy's - Mail out companies who ship equipment to customers - Full Service that provide installation, ongoing education and periodic testing programs 
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Original:  Their purpose is to help senior citizens and other people who may suffer from an impaired memory to keep track of medication intake .
Revised:  Their purpose is to help senior citizens and other people who may suffer from impaired ability to adhere to their prescribed medication regime .
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Original:  If the patient doesn’t take the medication out of the dispenser door, the pill dispenser will send a signal to a monitoring station who can contact the patient, family, or caregiver who can address the URL
Revised:  If the patient doesn’t take the medication out of the dispenser door, the pill dispenser will send a signal to a monitoring station who can contact the patient, family, or caregiver who can address the situation.
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Original: ""Pill Dispensers"" are commonly used to serve medical purposes, but it is also user to help individuals, be that the elderly or chronically ill, take their prescription medication, OTC medication or daily supplements at a given date and time.
Revised: Pill dispensers are commonly used to serve medical purposes, but it is also user to help individuals, be that the elderly or chronically ill, take their prescription medication, OTC medication or daily supplements at a given date and time.
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Original: ""Pill Dispensers"" are commonly used to serve medical purposes, but it is also user to help individuals, be that the elderly or chronically ill, take their prescription medication, OTC medication or daily supplements at a given date and time.
Revised: ""Pill Dispensers"" are commonly used to serve medical purposes, as well as to help individuals, be that the elderly or chronically ill, take their prescription medication, OTC medication or daily supplements at a given date and time.
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Original: Pill  dispensers are items which release medication at specified times.
Revised: Pill dispenser Pill dispensers are items which release medication at specified times.
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Original:  His work also covers the development of new organic dyes.
Revised:  His work also covers the development of new lorganic dyes.
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Original:  In regions where jumping races take place, flat racing and jumps racing are  treated as two distinct forms of racing and winning in one category does not preclude a horse entering a maiden in the other.
Revised:  In regions where jumping races take place, flat racing and jumps racing are sometimes treated as two distinct forms of racing and winning in one category does not preclude a horse entering a maiden in the other.
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Original:  In countries such as the USA , maidens rank above claiming races although owners may choose to race at maiden level to prevent their horse being claimed (bought) by another owner.
Revised:  In countries such as the United States , maidens rank above claiming races although owners may choose to race at maiden level to prevent their horse being claimed (bought) by another owner.
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Original:  In countries such as the United States, maidens rank above claiming races although owners may choose to race at maiden level to prevent their horse being claimed (bought) by another owner.
Revised:  In countries such as the United States, maidens rank above claiming races , while maiden claiming races allow the horse to be claimed (bought) by another owner.
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Original:   They have been nominated for six Grammy Awards"Northern Cree - Ewipihcihk (CR-6508)", CanyonRecords.com.
Revised:  Regarded as one of the best acts in modern Native American powwow music, they have been named one of the most respected pow-wow groups in North America and the world. The group, or their music, has been described as remarkably unified and powerful, attention-grabbing, arresting hypnotic, intense, passionate, exciting, energetic, and energizing. They have been nominated for six Grammy Awards"Northern Cree - Ewipihcihk (CR-6508)", CanyonRecords.com.
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