wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  In Los Angeles, California singer and actress Britney Spears, 24, has filed paers in Los Angeles County Superior Court to divorce her husband Kevin Federline, 28. A spokeswoman for the court, Kathy Roberts stated that the papers cited "irreconcilable differences" as the reason for the divorce and have, according to the courts, been legally separated as of Monday November 6.
Revised:  In Los Angeles, California singer and actress Britney Spears, 24, has filled papers in Los Angeles County Superior Court to divorce her husband Kevin Federline, 28. A spokeswoman for the court, Kathy Roberts stated that the papers cited "irreconcilable differences" as the reason for the divorce and have, according to the courts, been legally separated as of Monday November 6.
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Original:  The two were married on October 6, 2004 and currently have two sons the first named Sean Preston, 1  and a recent baby boy named Jayden James Federline who was born on September 12, 2006.
Revised:  The two were married on October 6, 2004 and currently have two sons the first named Sean Preston, 1 , and a recent baby boy named Jayden James Federline who was born on September 12, 2006.
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Original:  The two were married on October 6, 2004 and currently have two sons  the first named Sean Preston, 1, and a recent baby boy named Jayden James Federline who was born on September 12, 2006.
Revised:  The two were married on October 6, 2004 and currently have two sons , the first named Sean Preston, 1, and a recent baby boy named Jayden James Federline who was born on September 12, 2006.
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Original:  Neither Spears nor Federline have yet to release a statement
Revised:  Neither Spears nor Federline has yet released a statement
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Original:  The bus had mostly school children going to school in the morning bus.
Revised:  The bus contained about 50-70 passengers including school children going to school in the morning bus.
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Original:  Villagers rescued about 20 passengers  from being drowned.
Revised:  About 20 passengers from being drowned.
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Original:   The MSRTC has announced  a compensation of 100,000 to the kin of the deceased and also will bear the medical expenses of the injured
Revised:  The MSRTC has announced a compensation of 100,000 to the families of the deceased and also will bear the medical expenses of the injured
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Original:   The MSRTC has announced  a compensation of 100,000 to the kin of the deceased and also will bear the medical expenses of the injured
Revised:  The MSRTC has announced a compensation of 100,000 to the kin of the deceased 
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Original: File photo of an MSRTC bus A state transport bus fell down a bridge on the killing at least 17 people in of in central .
Revised: File photo of an MSRTC bus A state transport bus fell down a bridge on the killing at least seventeen people in of in central .
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Original:  The (MSRTC) bus between and fell off of the bridge as the driver lost his control over the bus after a tire burst.
Revised:  The (MSRTC) bus between and fell as the driver lost his control over the bus after a tire burst.
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Original:  The (MSRTC) bus between and fell off of the bridge as the driver lost his control over the bus after a tire burst.
Revised:  The (MSRTC) bus between and fell off of the bridge as the driver lost control over the bus after a tire burst.
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Original:  The bridge is a narrower one and does not have protective railings to it .
Revised:  The bridge is narrow and does not have protective railings to it .
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Original:  The bridge is a narrower one and does not have protective railings to it .
Revised:  The bridge is a narrower one and does not have protective railings .
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Original:  The bus fell 45 feet down off of it after tumbling twice.
Revised:  The bus fell 45 feet down off it after tumbling twice.
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Original:  The bus contained about 50-70 passengers including school children in the morning bus.
Revised:  The bus contained about 50–70 passengers including school children in the morning bus.
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Original:  There were 10 women and 7 men amongst the fatalities.
Revised:  There were ten women and seven men amongst the fatalities.
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Original:  About 20 of the other passengers were rescued by the villagers from being drowned.
Revised:  About twenty other passengers were rescued by the villagers from being drowned.
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Original:  The injured were transported to General Hospital, . Two more are reported dead at the hospital there increasing the toll to 19.
Revised:  The injured were transported to General Hospital, . Two more are reported dead at the hospital , increasing the death toll to nineteen.
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Original:  The MSRTC has announced that it will pay all the medical expenses of the injured and will also pay a compensation of 100,000 to the families of the deceased
Revised:  The MSRTC has announced it will pay all the medical expenses of the injured and will also pay a compensation of 100,000 to the families of the deceased
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Original:  The MSRTC has announced that it will pay all the medical expenses of the injured and will also pay a compensation of 100,000 to the families of the deceased
Revised:  The MSRTC has announced that it will pay the medical expenses of the injured and will also pay a compensation of 100,000 to the families of the deceased
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Original:  The (MSRTC) bus between and fell as the driver lost control over the bus after a tire burst .
Revised:  The (MSRTC) bus between and fell after a burst tire caused the driver to lose control of the vehicle .
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Original:  The bridge is narrow and does not have protective railings.
Revised:  The bridge is narrow and without protective railings.
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Original:  The bus fell 45 feet down off it after tumbling twice .
Revised:  The bus tumbled twice, falling 45 feet down off it after tumbling twice .
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Original:  The bus fell 45 feet down off it after tumbling twice .
Revised:  The bus fell 45 feet .
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Original: Now that the country has joined the WTO, Vietnam will have more access to overseas markets, but will force it to cut high import tariffs,  reducing the budget by as much as 21\%.
Revised: Now that the country has joined the WTO, Vietnam will have more access to overseas markets, but will be forced to cut high import tariffs, reducing the budget by as much as 21\%.
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Original: Now that the country has joined the WTO, Vietnam will have more access to overseas markets, but will force it to cut high import tariffs,  reducing the budget by as much as 21\%.
Revised: Now that the country has joined the WTO, Vietnam will have more access to overseas markets, but will force it to cut high import tariffs, thus reducing the budget by as much as 21\%.
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Original:  Vietnam, which has set out its intention to leave the ranks of the world's poorest countries by 2010, will become a WTO member 30 days after its National Assembly approves the move.
Revised:  Vietnam, which has proclaimed its intention to leave the ranks of the world's poorest countries by 2010, will become a WTO member 30 days after its National Assembly approves the move.
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Original: Vietnam , which has proclaimed its intention to leave the ranks of the world's poorest countries by 2010,  will become a WTO member 30 days after  its National Assembly approves the move .
Revised: Vietnam has proclaimed its intention to leave the ranks of the world's poorest countries by 2010, will become a WTO member 30 days after its National Assembly approves the move .
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Original: Vietnam , which has proclaimed its intention to leave the ranks of the world's poorest countries by 2010,  will become a WTO member 30 days after  its National Assembly approves the move .
Revised: Vietnam , which has proclaimed its intention to leave the ranks of the world's poorest countries by 2010, and will become a WTO member 30 days after its National Assembly approves the move .
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Original: Vietnam , which has proclaimed its intention to leave the ranks of the world's poorest countries by 2010,  will become a WTO member 30 days after  its National Assembly approves the move .
Revised: Vietnam , which has proclaimed its intention to leave the ranks of the world's poorest countries by 2010, will become a WTO member 30 days after its National Assembly .
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Original:  it will have to reduce import dutiesfrom the current average rate of 17.6\% to 13.8\% within five to seven years of joining the WTO . But banking,
Revised:  it will have to reduce import dutiesfrom the current average rate of 17.6\% to 13.8\% But banking,
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Original:  insurance and telecommunications industries have expressed some reservations over the prospect of increased international competition .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Restrictions on foreign ownership of firms inside the country will be also be lifted . "Foreign competition is bitter medicine for Vietnamese enterprises, but it will help them become stronger,"
Revised:  insurance and telecommunications industries have expressed some reservations over the prospect of increased international competition .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Restrictions on foreign ownership of Vietnamese firms will be eliminated . "Foreign competition is bitter medicine for Vietnamese enterprises, but it will help them become stronger,"
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Original:  said Le Dang Doanh, an economist at the ministry of planning and investment . Communist-run Vietnam has been trying to gain membership to the WTO for more than a decade
Revised:  said Le Dang Doanh, an economist at the ministry of planning and investment Communist-run Vietnam has been trying to gain membership to the WTO for more than a decade
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Original:  said Le Dang Doanh, an economist at the ministry of planning and investment . Communist-run Vietnam has been trying to gain membership to the WTO for more than a decade
Revised:  said Le Dang Doanh, an economist at the ministry of planning and investment . 
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Original: The World Trade Organization (WTO) has officially invited Vietnam to become a member of their organization.
Revised:  World Trade Organization (WTO) has officially invited Vietnam to become a member of their organization.
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Original:  But an earlier Wikinews report showed that the deaths only happened because of the fall to the ground when immobilized by the taser, not the taser itself  
Revised:  But an earlier Wikinews report showed that the deaths only happened because of the fall to the ground when immobilized by the taser, not the taser itself . 
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Original:  The tasers had been upholstered 20 times, four of those times further action was unnecessary, 13 were resolved when the laser sight was pointed at them and one other time the taser hadn't been fully upholstered when the situation was resolved.
Revised:  The tasers had been unholstered 20 times, four of those times further action was unnecessary, 13 were resolved when the laser sight was pointed at them and one other time the taser hadn't been fully upholstered when the situation was resolved.
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Original:  The tasers had been upholstered 20 times, four of those times further action was unnecessary, 13 were resolved when the laser sight was pointed at them and one other time the taser hadn't been fully upholstered when the situation was resolved.
Revised:  The tasers had been upholstered 20 times, four of those times further action was unnecessary, 13 were resolved when the laser sight was pointed at them and one other time the taser hadn't been fully drawn when the situation was resolved.
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Original: The United States Democratic Party , are projected to win control of the United States House of Representatives, the lower house of the United States Congress, the federal legislature.
Revised: The United States Democratic Party is projected to win control of the United States House of Representatives, the lower house of the United States Congress, the federal legislature.
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Original:  The remaining two races are too close to call.
Revised:  Several races are too close to call.
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Original: The key race in Virginia, upon which the outcome of majority control of the Senate rests, Republican incumbent George Allen was asked to resign on Wednesday by Senator and chairman of the Democratic Senatorial Campaign Committee, Charles Schumer.
Revised: The key race in Virginia, upon which the outcome of majority control of the Senate rests, Republican incumbent George Allen was asked to concede on Wednesday by Senator and chairman of the Democratic Senatorial Campaign Committee, Charles Schumer.
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Original: The key race in Virginia, upon which the outcome of majority control of the Senate rests , Republican incumbent George Allen was asked to concede on Wednesday by Senator and chairman of the Democratic Senatorial Campaign Committee, Charles Schumer.
Revised: The key race in Virginia, upon which the outcome of majority control of the Senate may rest , Republican incumbent George Allen was asked to concede on Wednesday by Senator and chairman of the Democratic Senatorial Campaign Committee, Charles Schumer.
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Original:  NIWA believes that the A-43A then travelled 13,500 km around Antarctica, landing new Auckland Islands and Stewart Island ended its journey.
Revised:  NIWA believes that the A-43A then travelled 13,500 km around Antarctica, landing new Auckland Islands and Stewart Island ending its journey.
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Original:  According to News agencies, Military spokesman Major-General Shaukat Sultan said that the blast took place in the town of Dargaiin the North West Frontier killing atleast 35 pakistani soldiers 
Revised:  The attack took place in the town of Dargaiin the North West Frontier killing atleast 35 pakistani soldiers 
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Original: The attack took place in the town og Dargai, 100 kms north of Peshwar.
Revised: The attack took place in the town of Dargai, 100 kms north of Peshwar.
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Original: The attack took place in the town og Dargai, 100 kms north of Peshwar.
Revised: The attack took place in the town og Dargai, 100 km north of Peshwar.
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Original:  Some of them are in the critical condition
Revised:  Some of them are in a critical condition
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Original: The attack took place in the town of Dargai, 100 km north of Peshwar  . 20 people are wounded in the attack.
Revised: The attack took place in the town of Dargai, 100 km north of Peshwar . 20 people are injured in the attack.
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Original: A suicide bomber killed at least 42 Pakistani soldiers at an army training centre today in the morning in the North West Frontier of Pakistan , according to Pakistani government soldiers.
Revised: A suicide bomber killed at least 42 Pakistani soldiers at an army training centre today in the North West Frontier of Pakistan , according to Pakistani government soldiers.
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Original: A suicide bomber killed at least 42 Pakistani soldiers at an army training centre today in the morning in the North West Frontier of Pakistan , according to Pakistani government soldiers.
Revised: A suicide bomber killed at least 42 Pakistani soldiers at an army training centre today in the morning in the North West Frontier Province , according to Pakistani government soldiers.
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Original:  The attack took place in the town of Dargai, 100 km north of Peshwar at 8:40 am local time (0310 UTC) today.
Revised:  The attack took place in the town of Dargai, 100 km north of Peshawar at 8:40 am local time (0310 UTC) today.
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Original:  The attack took place in the town of Dargai, 100 km north of Peshwar at 8:40 am local time (0310 UTC) today.
Revised:  The attack took place in the town of Dargai, 100 km north of Peshwar at 8:40 a.m. local time (0310 UTC) today.
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Original:  20 people are injured in the attack.
Revised:  20 people were injured in the attack.
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Original:  The injured persons are admitted at hospitals of Mardan and Peshawar.  ] 
Revised:  The injured were admitted to hospitals in Mardan and Peshawar. ] 
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Original:  The injured persons are admitted at hospitals of Mardan and Peshawar.  ] 
Revised:  The injured persons are admitted at hospitals of Mardan and Peshawar. cloak] 
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Original:  One topic that is being discussed there is the   formulation of goals for lowering greenhouse gas emmisions after the Kyoto-Protocol runs out in 2012.     de:Weltklimakonferenz in Nairobi hat begonn [[
Revised:  One topic that is being discussed there is the The formulation of goals for lowering greenhouse gas emmisions after the Kyoto-Protocol runs out in 2012. de:Weltklimakonferenz in Nairobi hat begonn [[
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Original:  One topic that is being discussed there is the   formulation of goals for lowering greenhouse gas emmisions after the Kyoto-Protocol runs out in 2012.     de:Weltklimakonferenz in Nairobi hat begonn [[
Revised:  One topic that is being discussed there is the formulation of goals for lowering greenhouse gas emmisions after the Kyoto-Protocol runs out in 2012. de:Weltklimakonferenz in Nairobi hat begonnen [[
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Original: Weltklimakonferenz in Nairobi hat begonnen de:Weltklimakonferenz in Nairobi hat begonnen Category:World Category:Africa Category:Asia Category:Oceania [[Category:South America Category:Environment Category:Disasters and acciden
Revised: Weltklimakonferenz in Nairobi hat begonnen Category:World Category:Africa Category:Asia Category:Oceania [[Category:South America Category:Environment Category:Disasters and acciden
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Original: The formulation of goals for lowering greenhouse gas emmisions after the Kyoto-Protocol runs out in 2012 is high on the agenda.
Revised: The formulation of goals for lowering greenhouse gas emissions after the Kyoto-Protocol runs out in 2012 is high on the agenda.
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Original:  Actions to mitigate the effects of climate change in developing countries include developing new species of food crops, constructing sea defences, planting vegetation, improving the water-supply infrastructre in vulnerable areas and increasing public awareness of the the need to conserve water.
Revised:  Actions to mitigate the effects of climate change in developing countries include developing new species of food crops, constructing sea defences, planting vegetation, improving the water-supply infrastructre in vulnerable areas and increasing public awareness of the need to conserve water.
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Original:  Webcasts of the proceedings and press conferences are available Related news Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:World Category:Africa Category:Asia Category:Oceania Category:South America Category:Environment Category:Disasters and acciden
Revised:  Webcasts of the proceedings and press conferences are available Related Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:World Category:Africa Category:Asia Category:Oceania Category:South America Category:Environment Category:Disasters and acciden
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Original:  Webcasts of the proceedings and press conferences are available Related news Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:World Category:Africa Category:Asia Category:Oceania Category:South America Category:Environment Category:Disasters and acciden
Revised:  Webcasts of the proceedings and press conferences are available Related news %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:World Category:Africa Category:Asia Category:Oceania Category:South America Category:Environment Category:Disasters and acciden
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Original: Some 6000 delegates will discuss these issues 6 - 17 November 2006.
Revised: Some 6,000 delegates will discuss these issues 6 - 17 November 2006.
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Original: The procedure will be carried out immediately after primary angioplasty, the opening up of blocked arteries, and, normally , will be performed within the vital five hours after the heart attack.
Revised: The procedure will be carried out immediately after primary angioplasty, the opening up of blocked arteries, normally performed within the vital five hours after the heart attack.
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Original:  That the proceduree may not be without risks is outlines by Nigel Hawkes in the Times today.
Revised:  That the procedure may not be without risks is outlines by Nigel Hawkes in the Times today.
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Original:  That the proceduree may not be without risks is outlines by Nigel Hawkes in the Times today.
Revised:  That the proceduree may not be without risks is outlined by Nigel Hawkes in the Times today.
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Original:  He describes the procedure as coming from the "quick and dirty" school of medical research which has produced great benefits beforee the science has caught up.
Revised:  He describes the procedure as coming from the "quick and dirty" school of medical research which has produced great benefits before the science has caught up.
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Original:  Some 600,000 patients survive heart attacks each year and the cost to the country may be as much as £7 bn taking into account not only hospitalisation and medical costs, but also the costs of lost working time.
Revised:  Some 600,000 patients survive heart attacks each year and the cost to the country may be as much as £7 billion taking into account not only hospitalisation and medical costs, but also the costs of lost working time.
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Original:  That the procedure may not be without risks is outlined by Nigel Hawkes in the Times today .
Revised:  Nigel Hawkes in the Times today .
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Original:  The new procedure involves injecting the patient ’ s heart with his own bone marrow stem cells in the expectation that they will help repair the damaged heart and prolong the patient ’ s active life.
Revised:  The new procedure involves injecting the patient ' s heart with his own bone marrow stem cells in the expectation that they will help repair the damaged heart and prolong the patient ’ s active life.
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Original:  The new procedure involves injecting the patient ’ s heart with his own bone marrow stem cells in the expectation that they will help repair the damaged heart and prolong the patient ’ s active life.
Revised:  The new procedure involves injecting the patient ’ s heart with his own bone marrow stem cells in the expectation that they will help repair the damaged heart and prolong the patient ' s active life.
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Original:  Professor Peter Weissberg, Medical Director, British Heart Foundation welcomed research into the role stem cells may play in treating heart conditions and saw it as complementing the Foundation ’ s own research programme.
Revised:  Professor Peter Weissberg, Medical Director, British Heart Foundation welcomed research into the role stem cells may play in treating heart conditions and saw it as complementing the Foundation ' s own research programme.
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Original:  ” The feasibility and safety of the procedure has been tested in smaller studies, and the few reports available show a trend towards positive effects, but large clinical trials are still missing
Revised:  " The feasibility and safety of the procedure has been tested in smaller studies, and the few reports available show a trend towards positive effects, but large clinical trials are still missing
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Original:  However both girls did agree that teenagers who use txt language starts to damage their spelling .
Revised:  However both girls did agree that the use of txt language damages the overall spelling of the users .
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