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Original: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennet 's (New York University) new book 'Breaking the Spell' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
Revised: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett 's (New York University) new book 'Breaking the Spell' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
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Original:  Wieseltier also criticizes a number of Dennet 's quotations of fellow philosophers, including David Hume, William James and Thomas Nagel.
Revised:  Wieseltier also criticizes a number of Dennett 's quotations of fellow philosophers, including David Hume, William James and Thomas Nagel.
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Original:  Nagel was a personal friend of Dennet 's.
Revised:  Nagel was a personal friend of Dennett 's.
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Original: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book ' Breaking the Spell ' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
Revised: Professor of philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book ' Breaking the Spell ' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
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Original: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book ' Breaking the Spell ' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
Revised: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book Breaking the Spell ' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
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Original: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book ' Breaking the Spell ' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
Revised: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book ' Breaking the Spell uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
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Original: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book ' Breaking the Spell ' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
Revised: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book ' Breaking the Spell ' uses the scientific method commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
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Original: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book ' Breaking the Spell ' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze various natural phenomenon, to examine religion.
Revised: Professor of Philosophy Daniel Dennett's (New York University) new book ' Breaking the Spell ' uses the scientific methods and tools that are commonly employed to analyze natural phenomena in order to examine religion.
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Original:  The New York Times published a strongly negative review by Leon Wieseltier on February 20th, which has resulted in some debate . Breaking the Spell attempts to understand religious memes ( idea ) in the same way as the selfish gene theory analyses.
Revised:  The New York Times ''' February 20th review by Leon Wieseltier on February 20th, which has resulted in some debate . Breaking the Spell attempts to understand religious memes ( idea ) in the same way as the selfish gene theory analyses.
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Original:  The New York Times published a strongly negative review by Leon Wieseltier on February 20th, which has resulted in some debate . Breaking the Spell attempts to understand religious memes ( idea ) in the same way as the selfish gene theory analyses.
Revised:  The New York Times published a strongly negative review by Leon Wieseltier on February 20th, which has resulted in some debate . Breaking the Spell attempts to present an understanding of religious memes ( idea ) in the same way as the selfish gene theory analyses.
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Original:  The New York Times published a strongly negative review by Leon Wieseltier on February 20th, which has resulted in some debate . Breaking the Spell attempts to understand religious memes ( idea ) in the same way as the selfish gene theory analyses.
Revised:  The New York Times published a strongly negative review by Leon Wieseltier on February 20th, which has resulted in some debate . Breaking the Spell attempts to understand religious memes ( pieces of information that can spread from person to person ) in the same way as the selfish gene theory analyses.
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Original:  This means taking the " point of view " of an individual religious meme, trying to maximize its successful propagation, in competition with other memes  .
Revised:  This means taking the " point of view of an individual religious meme, trying to maximize its successful propagation, in competition with other memes .
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Original:  This means taking the " point of view " of an individual religious meme, trying to maximize its successful propagation, in competition with other memes  .
Revised:  This means taking the " point of view " of an individual religious meme, in competition with other memes .
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Original:  This means taking the " point of view " of an individual religious meme, trying to maximize its successful propagation, in competition with other memes  .
Revised:  This means taking the " point of view " of an individual religious meme, trying to maximize its successful propagation, in competition with other memes , trying to maximize its own successful spread .
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Original:  Leon Wieseltier objects to Dennett's "meme's eye view" analysis as "scientism", suggesting that not all aspects of human life can or should be illuminated by science.
Revised:  Wieseltier objects to Dennett's "meme's eye view" analysis as "scientism", suggesting that not all aspects of human life can or should be illuminated by science.
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Original:  Leon Wieseltier objects to Dennett's "meme's eye view" analysis as "scientism", suggesting that not all aspects of human life can or should be illuminated by science.
Revised:  Leon Wieseltier objects to Dennett's "meme's eye view" analysis as "scientism", 
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Original:  Wieseltier claims "Dennett lives in a world in which you must believe in the grossest biologism or in the grossest theism, in a purely naturalistic understanding of religion or in intelligent design, in the omniscience of a white man with a long beard in 19th-century England or in the omniscience of a white man with a long beard in the sky."
Revised:  claiming that "Dennett lives in a world in which you must believe in the grossest biologism or in the grossest theism, in a purely naturalistic understanding of religion or in intelligent design, in the omniscience of a white man with a long beard in 19th-century England or in the omniscience of a white man with a long beard in the sky."
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Original:   Dennet responded that this  followed a pattern of recent "stunts" by the New York Times book review: "When you can't stand the implications of some scientific discipline X, but can't think of any solid objections, you brand them instances of the sin of Xism and then you don't have to take them seriously!"
Revised:  Dennet responded that this criticism followed a pattern of recent "stunts" by the New York Times book review: "When you can't stand the implications of some scientific discipline X, but can't think of any solid objections, you brand them instances of the sin of Xism and then you don't have to take them seriously!"
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Original:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dennett claims that " The very idea of an intensive scientific exploration of religion so upsets Wieseltier that he resorts to flagrant falsehoods — and doesn't even bother supporting his claims with citations."
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He continues to state that " The very idea of an intensive scientific exploration of religion so upsets Wieseltier that he resorts to flagrant falsehoods — and doesn't even bother supporting his claims with citations."
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Original:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dennett claims that " The very idea of an intensive scientific exploration of religion so upsets Wieseltier that he resorts to flagrant falsehoods — and doesn't even bother supporting his claims with citations."
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dennett claims that " the very idea of an intensive scientific exploration of religion so upsets Wieseltier that he resorts to flagrant falsehoods — and doesn't even bother supporting his claims with citations."
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Original:  Wieseltier also criticizes a number of Dennett's quotations of fellow philosophers, including David Hume, William James and Thomas Nagel.
Revised:  Wieseltier also criticizes several of Dennett's quotations of fellow philosophers, including David Hume, William James and Thomas Nagel.
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Original:  Nagel was a personal friend of Dennett's  . Brian Leiter, a Professor of Philosophy at the University of Texas, also objects to Wieseltier's claim that some aspects of human life can not be illuminated by science . "'The view that science can explain all human conditions and expressions, mental as well as physical'
Revised:  Nagel was a personal friend of Dennett's . Brian Leiter, a professor of philosophy at the University of Texas, also objects to Wieseltier's claim that some aspects of human life can not be illuminated by science . "'The view that science can explain all human conditions and expressions, mental as well as physical'
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Original:  Nagel was a personal friend of Dennett's  . Brian Leiter, a Professor of Philosophy at the University of Texas, also objects to Wieseltier's claim that some aspects of human life can not be illuminated by science . "'The view that science can explain all human conditions and expressions, mental as well as physical'
Revised:  Nagel was a personal friend of Dennett's . Brian Leiter, a Professor of Philosophy at the University of Texas, also objects to Wieseltier's claim that some aspects of human life can not be illuminated by a scientific approach . "'The view that science can explain all human conditions and expressions, mental as well as physical'
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Original:  Dennett is eager for religious people to read his book , and spends the first third  motivating and justifying his project;
Revised:  Dennett is eager for religious people to read his book , and spends the first third of the book motivating and justifying his project;
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Original:  and this may have had bearing on the New York Times' selection of reviewers.
Revised:  this may have had bearing on the New York Times' selection of reviewers.
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Original:  Both the selfish gene theory and the idea of memes were originally popularized by Professor Richard Dawkins (University of Oxford, Biologist), in his book The Selfish Gene  .
Revised:  Both the selfish gene theory and the idea of memes were originally popularized by Professor Richard Dawkins (University of Oxford, Biologist), in his book The Selfish Gene '' .
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Original:  Daniel Dennett is among the most widely read living philosophers, and is highly regarded for the diversity of his academic contributions.
Revised:  Daniel Dennett is among the most widely read living philosophers, highly regarded for the diversity of his academic contributions.
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Original:  Many of his popular works concern evolution, memes , and human thought
Revised:  Many of his popular works concern evolution, memetics , and human thought
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Original: The wine world had previously suspected that Cipresso  collaboration with Samson , would be little more than a publicity stunt.
Revised: The wine world had previously suspected that Cipresso 's collaboration with Samson , would be little more than a publicity stunt.
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Original: The wine world had previously suspected that Cipresso  collaboration with Samson , would be little more than a publicity stunt.
Revised: The wine world had previously suspected that Cipresso collaboration with Samson would be little more than a publicity stunt.
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Original:  Such fears evaporated when U.S.  expert Robert Parker rated her effort at 91 ;
Revised:  Such fears evaporated when U.S. expert Robert Parker rated their effort at 91 ;
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Original:  Samson  husband, Daniel Oliveros,  is a Manhattan wine merchant who met her when she was a dancer at Scores, a popular strip club.
Revised:  Samson 's husband, Daniel Oliveros, is a Manhattan wine merchant who met her when she was a dancer at Scores, a popular strip club.
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Original:  Samson  husband, Daniel Oliveros,  is a Manhattan wine merchant who met her when she was a dancer at Scores, a popular strip club.
Revised:  Samson husband, Daniel Oliveros, is a Manhattan wine merchant . The couple met when she was a dancer at Scores, a popular strip club.
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Original:  Savanna Samson  last film earned her the porn industry's highest award for best all-girl sex scene.
Revised:  Savanna Samson 's last film earned her the porn industry's highest award for best all-girl sex scene.
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Original:  Her best-known films are 'Big Blowout', 'Fetish Underground ' and 'Poke Her' . Roberto Cipresso previous "patron" (investor ) was Pope John Paul II
Revised:  Her best-known films are Big Blowout, Fetish Underground and Poke Her . Roberto Cipresso previous "patron" (investor ) was Pope John Paul II
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Original:  Her best-known films are 'Big Blowout', 'Fetish Underground ' and 'Poke Her' . Roberto Cipresso previous "patron" (investor ) was Pope John Paul II
Revised:  Her best-known films are 'Big Blowout', 'Fetish Underground ' and 'Poke Her' . Roberto Cipresso 's previous investor was Pope John Paul II
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Original: The new company, AT&T, with headquarters in San Antonio, Texas, announced on Sunday the 6th, the $67 billion dollar purchase of its competitor, Bellsouth, the company which, since 2001, At&T has had joint venture control of Cingular Wireless, the largest cellular phone provider in the United States.
Revised: The new AT&T, with headquarters in San Antonio, Texas, announced on Sunday the 6th, the $67 billion dollar purchase of its competitor, Bellsouth, the company which, since 2001, At&T has had joint venture control of Cingular Wireless, the largest cellular phone provider in the United States.
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Original: The new company, AT&T, with headquarters in San Antonio, Texas, announced on Sunday the 6th, the $67 billion dollar purchase of its competitor, Bellsouth, the company which, since 2001, At&T has had joint venture control of Cingular Wireless, the largest cellular phone provider in the United States.
Revised: The new company, AT&T, with it's headquarters now in San Antonio, Texas, announced on Sunday the 6th, the $67 billion dollar purchase of its competitor, Bellsouth, the company which, since 2001, At&T has had joint venture control of Cingular Wireless, the largest cellular phone provider in the United States.
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Original:  The announced purchase recalls the planned $ 115 billion dollar merger of MCI WorldCom and Sprint Corp in 1999 that was prohited by the Federal Government . Despite this, analysts think the federal actions will be smaller, since these actions came under protest three months ago due to the actions of their European rivals.
Revised:  The announced purchase recalls the planned $ 115 billion dollar merger of MCI WorldCom and Sprint in 1999 that was prohited by the Federal Government . Despite this, analysts think the federal actions will be smaller, since these actions came under protest three months ago due to the actions of their European rivals.
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Original:  The announced purchase recalls the planned $ 115 billion dollar merger of MCI WorldCom and Sprint Corp in 1999 that was prohited by the Federal Government . Despite this, analysts think the federal actions will be smaller, since these actions came under protest three months ago due to the actions of their European rivals.
Revised:  The announced purchase recalls the planned $ 115 billion dollar merger of MCI WorldCom and Sprint Corp in 1999 that was prohited by the federal government . Despite this, analysts think the federal actions will be smaller, since these actions came under protest three months ago due to the actions of their European rivals.
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Original: The new AT&T , with it's headquarters now in San Antonio, Texas, announced on March 6th, the $67 billion dollar purchase of its competitor, BellSouth, the company which, since 2001, AT&T has had joint venture control of Cingular Wireless, the largest cellular phone provider in the United States.
Revised:  AT&T , with it's headquarters now in San Antonio, Texas, announced on March 6th, the $67 billion dollar purchase of its competitor, BellSouth, the company which, since 2001, AT&T has had joint venture control of Cingular Wireless, the largest cellular phone provider in the United States.
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Original:  The announced purchase recalls the planned $ & 115 billion dollar merger of MCI WorldCom and Sprint in 1999 that was prohited by the federal government.
Revised:  The announced purchase recalls the planned $ AT& 115 billion dollar merger of MCI WorldCom and Sprint in 1999 that was prohited by the federal government.
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Original:  With the price of AT&T closing at 27.99 USD a share, and the price of Bellsouth closing at 37.09USD a share, AT&T will pay an additional 17.9\% for each stock of Bellsouth .
Revised:  With the price of AT&T closing at 27.99 USD a share, and the price of BellSouth closing at 37.09USD a share, AT&T will pay an additional 17.9\% for each stock of Bellsouth .
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Original:  With the price of AT&T closing at 27.99 USD a share, and the price of Bellsouth closing at 37.09USD a share, AT&T will pay an additional 17.9\% for each stock of Bellsouth .
Revised:  With the price of AT&T closing at 27.99 USD a share, and the price of Bellsouth closing at 37.09USD a share, AT&T will pay an additional 17.9\% for each stock of BellSouth .
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Original:  This operation ultimately leads to a capitalization of $165 billion USD, will try to cut at least 10,000 employees, have low costs of operation in networks, and save $ 2 billion after the second year closed the deal , with altogether saves $18 billion.
Revised:  This operation ultimately leads to a capitalization of $165 billion USD, and officials with the companies predict a force reduction of at least 10,000 employees, lower costs of operation in networks, and an overall savings of $ 2 billion after the second year closed the deal , with altogether saves $18 billion.
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Original:  This operation ultimately leads to a capitalization of $165 billion USD, will try to cut at least 10,000 employees, have low costs of operation in networks, and save $ 2 billion after the second year closed the deal , with altogether saves $18 billion.
Revised:  This operation ultimately leads to a capitalization of $165 billion USD, will try to cut at least 10,000 employees, have low costs of operation in networks, and save $ 2 billion after the second year , with altogether saves $18 billion.
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Original:  Also, AT&T announced that it will try to acquire the $ 10 billion dollars worth of stocks that were yielded during the company's bankruptcy in 1984 &
Revised:  Also, AT&T announced that it will try to acquire the $ 10 billion dollars worth of stocks that were yielded during the company's bankruptcy in 1984. &
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Original:  The announced purchase recalls the planned $ 115 billion dollar merger of MCI WorldCom and Sprint in 1999 that was prohited by the federal government.
Revised:  The announced purchase recalls the planned $ 115 billion dollar merger of MCI WorldCom and Sprint in 1999 that was prohibited by the federal government.
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Original: 150px AT&T   Inc. and BellSouth announced a USD$67 billion merger deal Sunday.
Revised: The new AT&T Inc. and BellSouth announced a USD$67 billion merger deal Sunday.
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Original:  AT&T also announced that it will try to acquire the $ 10 billion dollars worth of stocks that were yielded during the company's bankruptcy in 1984.
Revised:  AT&T also announced that it will try to acquire the $ 10 billion worth of stocks that were yielded during the company's bankruptcy in 1984.
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Original:  In a press release, the Senator referred specifically to last nights episode of Four Corners.
Revised:  In a press release, the Senator referred specifically to last night's episode of Four Corners.
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Original: The documentary, entitled " How The Kids Took Over " , investigated the increase in marketing to children, who "have a say" in  $700 billion worth of spending each year.
Revised: The documentary, entitled How The Kids Took Over " , investigated the increase in marketing to children, who "have a say" in $700 billion worth of spending each year.
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Original: The documentary, entitled " How The Kids Took Over " , investigated the increase in marketing to children, who "have a say" in  $700 billion worth of spending each year.
Revised: The documentary, entitled " How The Kids Took Over , investigated the increase in marketing to children, who "have a say" in $700 billion worth of spending each year.
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Original:  Funeral arrangements are pending . External links Baseball great Kirby Puckett dies at 45 from CNN.com Kirby Pickett dies day after suffering stroke from ESPN.com Twins Organization saddened by death of Kirby Puckett from MLB.c
Revised:  Funeral arrangements are pending External links Baseball great Kirby Puckett dies at 45 from CNN.com Kirby Pickett dies day after suffering stroke from ESPN.com Twins Organization saddened by death of Kirby Puckett from MLB.c
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Original:  Funeral arrangements are pending . External links Baseball great Kirby Puckett dies at 45 from CNN.com Kirby Pickett dies day after suffering stroke from ESPN.com Twins Organization saddened by death of Kirby Puckett from MLB.c
Revised:  Funeral arrangements are pending . 
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Original: Kirby Puckett, a former 12-season professional baseball player and Minnesota Twins legend, died Monday afternoon, March 6, in a Phoenix, Arizona, hospital, one day after suffering a stroke and undergoing emergency surgery for the resultant cerebral hemorrhage.
Revised: Kirby Puckett, a former professional baseball player and Minnesota Twins legend, died Monday afternoon, March 6, in a Phoenix, Arizona, hospital, one day after suffering a stroke and undergoing emergency surgery for the resultant cerebral hemorrhage.
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Original:  The Hall of Fame centerfielder, whose .318 career batting average is surpassed only by Joe DiMaggio among right-handed hitters, was a ten-time All-Star , won six Gold Gloves and five Silver Sluggers , and led the Twins to World Series Championships in 1987 and 1991.
Revised:  The Hall of Fame centerfielder, whose .318 career batting average is surpassed only by Joe DiMaggio among right-handed hitters, was a ten-time All-Star , won six Gold Glove awards and five Silver Sluggers , and led the Twins to World Series Championships in 1987 and 1991.
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