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Original: Film Year Title Role Notes 1984 Boetie Gaan Border Toe Boetie van Tonder 1985 Morenga v. Schiller1986Boetie op Maneuvers / Wild ManeuversBoetie van Tonder 1987 Saturday Night at the Palace Dougie 1987 Gor Norman 1987 Steel Dawn Makker 1988 Skeleton Coast Blade 1988 Act of Piracy Sean Stevens 1988 Killer Instinct / The Rutanga Tapes Assad1989Reason to DieWesley Wilson1989The RevengerMackie 1989  Circles in a Forest Saul Barnard 1990 Buried Alive Ken Wade Television film19921492 :
Revised: Film Year Title Role Notes 1984 Boetie Gaan Border Toe Boetie van Tonder 1985 Morenga v. Schiller1986Boetie op Maneuvers / Wild ManeuversBoetie van Tonder 1987 Saturday Night at the Palace Dougie 1987 Gor Norman 1987 Steel Dawn Makker 1988 Skeleton Coast Blade 1988 Act of Piracy Sean Stevens 1988 Killer Instinct / The Rutanga Tapes Assad 1989 Circles in a Forest Saul Barnard 1990 Buried Alive Ken Wade Television film19921492 :
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Original: Film Year Title Role Notes 1984 Boetie Gaan Border Toe Boetie van Tonder 1985 Morenga v. Schiller1986Boetie op Maneuvers / Wild ManeuversBoetie van Tonder 1987 Saturday Night at the Palace Dougie 1987 Gor Norman 1987 Steel Dawn Makker 1988 Skeleton Coast Blade 1988 Act of Piracy Sean Stevens 1988 Killer Instinct / The Rutanga Tapes Assad1989Reason to DieWesley Wilson1989The RevengerMackie 1989  Circles in a Forest Saul Barnard 1990 Buried Alive Ken Wade Television film19921492 :
Revised: Film Year Title Role Notes 1984 Boetie Gaan Border Toe Boetie van Tonder 1985 Morenga v. Schiller1986Boetie op Maneuvers / Wild ManeuversBoetie van Tonder 1987 Saturday Night at the Palace Dougie 1987 Gor Norman 1987 Steel Dawn Makker 1988 Skeleton Coast Blade 1988 Act of Piracy Sean Stevens 1988 Killer Instinct / The Rutanga Tapes Assad1989Reason to DieWesley Wilson1989The RevengerMackie 1989 Reason to Die Wesley Wilson 1989 The Revenger Mackie 1989 Circles in a Forest Saul Barnard 1990 Buried Alive Ken Wade Television film19921492 :
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Original: Film Year Title Role Notes 1984 Boetie Gaan Border Toe Boetie van Tonder 1985 Morenga v. Schiller1986Boetie op Maneuvers / Wild ManeuversBoetie van Tonder 1987 Saturday Night at the Palace Dougie 1987 Gor Norman 1987 Steel Dawn Makker 1988 Skeleton Coast Blade 1988 Act of Piracy Sean Stevens 1988 Killer Instinct / The Rutanga Tapes Assad1989Reason to DieWesley Wilson1989The RevengerMackie 1989  Circles in a Forest Saul Barnard 1990 Buried Alive Ken Wade Television film19921492 :
Revised: Film Year Title Role Notes 1984 Boetie Gaan Border Toe Boetie van Tonder 1985 Morenga v. Schiller1986Boetie op Maneuvers / Wild ManeuversBoetie van Tonder 1987 Saturday Night at the Palace Dougie 1987 Gor Norman 1987 Steel Dawn Makker 1988 Skeleton Coast Blade 1988 Act of Piracy Sean Stevens 1988 Killer Instinct / The Rutanga Tapes Assad1989Reason to DieWesley Wilson1989The RevengerMackie 1989 Circles in a Forest Saul Barnard 1990 Buried Alive Ken Wade Television film 1992 1492 :
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Original:  Conquest of ParadiseGuevara 1992 The Finishing Touch Mikael Gant 1993 Hard Target Pik van Cleef 1995 Darkman II:
Revised:  Conquest of Paradise Guevara 1992 The Finishing Touch Mikael Gant 1993 Hard Target Pik van Cleef 1995 Darkman II:
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Original:  Conquest of ParadiseGuevara 1992 The Finishing Touch Mikael Gant 1993 Hard Target Pik van Cleef 1995 Darkman II:
Revised:  Conquest of ParadiseGuevara 1992 The Finishing Touch Mikael Gant 1993 Hard Target Pik Van Cleef 1995 Darkman II:
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Original: Die Peyton Westlake / Darkman Direct-to-video 1997 Zeus and Roxanne Claude Carver 1998 Progeny Dr. Craig Burton 1999 The Mummy Imhotep 2001 The Mummy Returns Imhotep 2002 Con Express  Anton Simeonov Direct-to-video 2003 Agent Cody Banks François Molay 2003 Endangered Species Warden 2004 Forgiveness Tertius Coetzee 2004 Meltdown Khalid / Sands Television film 2006 Waist Deep Police Detective #1 Uncredited 2006 Blood Diamond Colonel Coetzee2006Death TrainLennart 2007 Living & Dying Det.
Revised: Die Peyton Westlake / Darkman Direct-to-video 1997 Zeus and Roxanne Claude Carver 1998 Progeny Dr. Craig Burton 1999 The Mummy Imhotep 2001 The Mummy Returns Imhotep 2002 Con Express General Anton Simeonov Direct-to-video 2003 Agent Cody Banks François Molay 2003 Endangered Species Warden 2004 Forgiveness Tertius Coetzee 2004 Meltdown Khalid / Sands Television film 2006 Waist Deep Police Detective #1 Uncredited 2006 Blood Diamond Colonel Coetzee2006Death TrainLennart 2007 Living & Dying Det.
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Original: Die Peyton Westlake / Darkman Direct-to-video 1997 Zeus and Roxanne Claude Carver 1998 Progeny Dr. Craig Burton 1999 The Mummy Imhotep 2001 The Mummy Returns Imhotep 2002 Con Express  Anton Simeonov Direct-to-video 2003 Agent Cody Banks François Molay 2003 Endangered Species Warden 2004 Forgiveness Tertius Coetzee 2004 Meltdown Khalid / Sands Television film 2006 Waist Deep Police Detective #1 Uncredited 2006 Blood Diamond Colonel Coetzee2006Death TrainLennart 2007 Living & Dying Det.
Revised: Die Peyton Westlake / Darkman Direct-to-video 1997 Zeus and Roxanne Claude Carver 1998 Progeny Dr. Craig Burton 1999 The Mummy Imhotep 2001 The Mummy Returns Imhotep 2002 Con Express Anton Simeonov Direct-to-video 2003 Agent Cody Banks François Molay 2003 Endangered Species Warden 2004 Forgiveness Tertius Coetzee 2004 Meltdown Khalid / Sands Television film 2006 Waist Deep Police Detective #1 Uncredited 2006 Blood Diamond Colonel Coetzee 2006 Death Train Lennart 2007 Living & Dying Det.
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Original: Die Peyton Westlake / Darkman Direct-to-video 1997 Zeus and Roxanne Claude Carver 1998 Progeny Dr. Craig Burton 1999 The Mummy Imhotep 2001 The Mummy Returns Imhotep 2002 Con Express  Anton Simeonov Direct-to-video 2003 Agent Cody Banks François Molay 2003 Endangered Species Warden 2004 Forgiveness Tertius Coetzee 2004 Meltdown Khalid / Sands Television film 2006 Waist Deep Police Detective #1 Uncredited 2006 Blood Diamond Colonel Coetzee2006Death TrainLennart 2007 Living & Dying Det.
Revised: Die Peyton Westlake / Darkman Direct-to-video 1997 Zeus and Roxanne Claude Carver 1998 Progeny Dr. Craig Burton 1999 The Mummy Imhotep 2001 The Mummy Returns Imhotep 2002 Con Express Anton Simeonov Direct-to-video 2003 Agent Cody Banks François Molay 2003 Endangered Species Warden 2004 Forgiveness Tertius Coetzee 2004 Meltdown Khalid / Sands Television film 2006 Waist Deep Police Detective #1 Uncredited 2006 Blood Diamond Colonel Coetzee2006Death TrainLennart 2007 Living & Dying Detective
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Original: Television + Year Title Role Notes1983Meisie van SuidwesWillem Dreyer9-parter TV series 1992Red Shoe Diaries Bill Episode:
Revised: Television + Year Title Role Notes 1983 Meisie van Suidwes Willem Dreyer 9-parter TV series 1992 Red Shoe Diaries Bill Episode:
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Original:  "Double Dare" 1995American Gothic Rafael Santo Episode:
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Original:  "A Tree Grows in Trinity" 1995Fallen Angels MacMan Episode:
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Original:  "Fly Paper" 1996Nash Bridges Alex Abe Episode:
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Original:  "Genesis" 1999– 2000Strange World Dark-Haired Man 3 episodes 2000Charmed Darklighter Episode:
Revised:  "Genesis" 1999– 2000 Strange World Dark-Haired Man 3 episodes 2000Charmed Darklighter Episode:
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Original:  "Genesis" 1999– 2000Strange World Dark-Haired Man 3 episodes 2000Charmed Darklighter Episode:
Revised:  "Genesis" 1999– 2000Strange World Dark-Haired Man 3 episodes 2000 Charmed Darklighter Episode:
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Original:  "Murphy's Luck" 2003– 04Veritas :
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Original:  The Quest Vincent Siminou 13 episodes 2004Alias Mr. Zisman Episode:
Revised:  The Quest Vincent Siminou 13 episodes 2004 Alias Mr. Zisman Episode:
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Original:  "Crossings" 200524 Habib Marwan 17 episodes 2007Shark Andre Zitofsky Episode:
Revised:  "Crossings" 2005 24 Habib Marwan 17 episodes 2007Shark Andre Zitofsky Episode:
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Original:  "Crossings" 200524 Habib Marwan 17 episodes 2007Shark Andre Zitofsky Episode:
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Original:  "Gangster Movies" 2009Chuck Vincent Smith 3 episodes 2009– 10NCIS Mossad Officer Amit Hadar 3 episodes 2010Psych J.T. Waring Episode:
Revised:  "Gangster Movies" 2009 Chuck Vincent Smith 3 episodes 2009– 10NCIS Mossad Officer Amit Hadar 3 episodes 2010Psych J.T. Waring Episode:
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Original:  "Gangster Movies" 2009Chuck Vincent Smith 3 episodes 2009– 10NCIS Mossad Officer Amit Hadar 3 episodes 2010Psych J.T. Waring Episode:
Revised:  "Gangster Movies" 2009Chuck Vincent Smith 3 episodes 2009– 2010 NCIS Mossad Officer Amit Hadar 3 episodes 2010Psych J.T. Waring Episode:
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Original:  "Gangster Movies" 2009Chuck Vincent Smith 3 episodes 2009– 10NCIS Mossad Officer Amit Hadar 3 episodes 2010Psych J.T. Waring Episode:
Revised:  "Gangster Movies" 2009Chuck Vincent Smith 3 episodes 2009– 10NCIS Mossad Officer Amit Hadar 3 episodes 2010 Psych J.T. Waring Episode:
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Original:  "A Very Juliet Episode" 2011Young JusticeKobra (voice) Episode:
Revised:  "A Very Juliet Episode" 2011 Young JusticeKobra (voice) Episode:
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Original:  "Drop-Zone" 2011Bones Jacob Broadsky 3 episodes 2013Elementary Christos Theophilus Episode:
Revised:  "Drop-Zone" 2011 Bones Jacob Broadsky 3 episodes 2013Elementary Christos Theophilus Episode:
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Original:  "Drop-Zone" 2011Bones Jacob Broadsky 3 episodes 2013Elementary Christos Theophilus Episode:
Revised:  "Drop-Zone" 2011Bones Jacob Broadsky 3 episodes 2013 Elementary Christos Theophilus Episode:
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Original:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
Revised:  "Heroine" 2014 Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
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Original:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
Revised:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015 Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
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Original:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
Revised:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016 Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
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Original:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
Revised:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016 Cape Town Robin Van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
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Original:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
Revised:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017 Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
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Original:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
Revised:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017 Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
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Original:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
Revised:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019 The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
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Original:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
Revised:  "Heroine" 2014Crisis Jakob Vries 2 episodes 2015Grimm Jonathon Wilde Episode: "Maréchaussée" 2016Criminal Minds: Beyond Borders Armand Smit Episode: "Iqiniso" 2016Cape Town Robin van Rees 6 episodes 2017Voltron : Legendary Defender Ulaz (voice) Episode: "Shiro's Escape" 2017Bosch Rudy Tafero 9 episodes 2019The Blacklist Marko Jankowics Episode: "Marko Jankowics (No. 58)" 2019 Tom Clancy's Jack Ryan Jost Van Der Byl 4 episodes
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Original:  He is famous for roles such as Imhotep in The Mummy and The Mummy Returns, Colonel Coetzee in Blood Diamond, Pik van Cleef in Hard Target, Dr. Peyton Westlake / Darkman in Darkman II and Darkman III, Zartan in G.I. Joe: The Rise of Cobra and its sequel, sniper Jacob Broadsky in the TV series Bones and terrorist Habib Marwan during the fourth season of 24.
Revised:  He is famous for roles such as Imhotep in The Mummy and The Mummy Returns, Colonel Coetzee in Blood Diamond, Pik van Cleef in Hard Target, Dr. Peyton Westlake in Darkman II and Darkman III, Zartan in G.I. Joe: The Rise of Cobra and its sequel, sniper Jacob Broadsky in the TV series Bones and terrorist Habib Marwan during the fourth season of 24.
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Original:  The ongoing work of maintaining, supporting, and coordinating future revisions to the PREMIS Data Dictionary is undertaken by the PREMIS Editorial Committee, hosted by the Library of Congress  
Revised:  The ongoing work of maintaining, supporting, and coordinating future revisions to the PREMIS Data Dictionary is undertaken by the PREMIS Editorial Committee, hosted by the Library of Congress . 
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Original: Moral Theory The right to armed self-preservation is derived from Graeco-Roman Natural Rights theory, clearly enunciated by the Roman statesman Cicero (106–43 B.C.) and other stoic philosophers, influenced by Aristotle.
Revised: Moral theory The right to armed self-preservation is derived from Graeco-Roman Natural Rights theory, clearly enunciated by the Roman statesman Cicero (106–43 B.C.) and other stoic philosophers, influenced by Aristotle.
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Original: The right of self-defense (also called, when it applies to the defense of another, alter ego defense, defense of others, defense of a third person) is the right for people to use reasonable force or defensive force, for the purpose of defending one's own life (self-defense) or the lives of others, including –in certain circumstances– the use of deadly force.
Revised: The right of self-defense (also called, when it applies to the defense of another, alter ego defense, defense of others, defense of a third person) is the right for people to use reasonable or defensive force, for the purpose of defending one's own life (self-defense) or the lives of others, including –in certain circumstances– the use of deadly force.
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Original:  The Model Penal Code is not official law in the United States , though many courts and states borrow heavily from it.
Revised:  The Model Penal Code is not official law in the United States . Many courts and states borrow heavily from it.
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Original: The right of self-defense (also called, when it applies to the defense of another, alter ego defense, defense of others, defense of a third person) is the right for people to use reasonable or defensive force, for the purpose of defending one's own life (self-defense) or the lives of others, including –in certain circumstances– the use of deadly force.
Revised: The right of self-defendant (also called, when it applies to the defense of another, alter ego defense, defense of others, defense of a third person) is the right for people to use reasonable or defensive force, for the purpose of defending one's own life (self-defense) or the lives of others, including –in certain circumstances– the use of deadly force.
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Original:  John Kaplan, Robert Weisberg, Guyora Binder If  defendant uses defensive force because of such a perception, and the perception is not reasonable, the defendant may have an "imperfect self-defense" as an excuse.
Revised:  John Kaplan, Robert Weisberg, Guyora Binder If a defendant uses defensive force because of such a perception, and the perception is not reasonable, the defendant may have an "imperfect self-defense" as an excuse.
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Original:  He held this post till the summer of 2004, when he returned to India and to journalism, and again joined The Pioneer for some time, edited by Chandan Mitra.
Revised:  He held this post till 
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Original:  Political career A year later, in December 1995, he gave up full-time journalism to concentrate on a public career and began to assist L.K. Advani and Atal Bihari Vajpayee in their parliamentary work.
Revised:  Political career In December 1995, he gave up full-time journalism to concentrate on a public career and began to assist L.K. Advani and Atal Bihari Vajpayee in their parliamentary work.
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Original: He took a brief break from journalism from 1995 to 2004.
Revised: He took a break from journalism from 1995 to 2004.
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Original:  External links Kanchan Gupta on Twitter   Kanchan Gupta's Personal Blog - Agent Provocateur
Revised:  External links Kanchan Gupta on Twitter External links Kanchan Gupta's Personal Blog - Agent Provocateur
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Original: Samad LIA sites scatter over an estimated 17,000 km2 bordered to the west in Izkī, to the north in the capital area, to the south Jaʿlān, and to the east at the coast.
Revised: Samad LIA sites scatter over an estimated bordered to the west in Izkī, to the north in the capital area, to the south Jaʿlān, and to the east at the coast.
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Original:  There are different definitions for Oman: while traditional Oman also includes the present-day United Arab Emirates , its prehistoric remains differ in some respects from the more specifically defined Oman proper, which corresponds roughly with the present-day central provinces of the Sultanate.
Revised:  There are different definitions for Oman: traditional Oman includes the present-day United Arab Emirates , its prehistoric remains differ in some respects from the more specifically defined Oman proper, which corresponds roughly with the present-day central provinces of the Sultanate.
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Original:  There are different definitions for Oman: while traditional Oman also includes the present-day United Arab Emirates , its prehistoric remains differ in some respects from the more specifically defined Oman proper, which corresponds roughly with the present-day central provinces of the Sultanate.
Revised:  There are different definitions for Oman: while traditional Oman also includes the present-day United Arab Emirates (U.A.E.), though its prehistoric remains differ in some respects from the more specifically defined Oman proper, which corresponds roughly with the present-day central provinces of the Sultanate.
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Original:  Different ages are reflected in typological assemblages, Old Stone  Age, New Stone  Age, Copper Age, Bronze Age, Early Iron Age, Late Iron Age, that is Samad Period, so-called late pre-Islamic culture and the Age of Islam.
Revised:  Different ages are reflected in typological assemblages, Old Stone Age, New Stone Age, Copper Age, Bronze Age, Early Iron Age, Late Iron Age, and the Age of Islam.
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