wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Police tasered Tabatabainejad multiple times  after the student attempted to encourage other students to join him in his act of resistance.
Revised: Police tasered Tabatabainejad multiple times allegedly after the student attempted to encourage other students to join him in his act of resistance.
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Original: Police tasered Tabatabainejad multiple times allegedly after the student attempted to encourage other students to join him in his act of resistance.
Revised: Police tasered Tabatabainejad multiple times after the student attempted to encourage other students to join him in his act of resistance.
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Original:  This action was caught by another student via a cell phone and consisted of critical comments of police conduct but not calls to join in resistance .
Revised:  This action was caught by another student via a cell phone .
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Original:  The report says that the girl was raped repeatedly and the act filmed on mobile phones.
Revised:  The report says that the girl was raped repeatedly and the rape was filmed on mobile phones.
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Original:  The report says that the girl was raped repeatedly and the rape was filmed on mobile phones.
Revised:  The report says that the girl was raped repeatedly and the act was filmed on mobile phones.
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Original: A group of 13 teenage boys raped a 13-year old school girl in Zurich last weekend, reports the website of the German language newspaper 20 Minuten .
Revised: A group of 13 teenage boys raped a 13-year old school girl in last weekend, reports the website of the German language newspaper 20 Minuten .
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Original: A group of 13 teenage boys raped a 13-year old school girl in Zurich last weekend, reports the website of the German language newspaper 20 Minuten .
Revised: A group of 13 teenage boys raped a 13-year old school girl in Zurich last weekend, reports the website of the German language newspaper .
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Original:  Verena Lang Temperli, a school official, told 20 Minuten that this case is a problem of society itself, not a problem of the school .
Revised:  Verena Lang Temperli, a school official, told 20 Minuten that this case is a problem of society itself, not a problem of the school 
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Original:  External links Schulhaus Buhnrain school in Zurich Seebac
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Original:  It comes shortly after one of Europe's most prestigious catwalk shows, in the Spanish capital, banned underweight models, using their body mass index as a guide  
Revised:  It comes shortly after one of Europe's most prestigious catwalk shows, in the Spanish capital, banned underweight models, using their body mass index as a guide . 
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Original: It was the death of another model, Luisel Ramos from Uruguay that first cast the light on the fashion industry which allows models to starve themselves to achieve "the perfect form".
Revised: It was the death of another model, Luisel Ramos from Uruguay that first cast light on the fashion industry which allows models to starve themselves to achieve "the perfect form".
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Original: It was the death of another model, Luisel Ramos from Uruguay that first cast the light on the fashion industry which allows models to starve themselves to achieve "the perfect form".
Revised: It was the death of another model, Luisel Ramos from Uruguay that first cast the light on the problem of models starving themselves to achieve "the perfect form".
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Original:  She died of a heart failure during a fashion show
Revised:  Ramos died of a heart failure during a fashion show
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Original:  Ana Carolina Reston was 21 years old when  died on November 14 in Sau Paulo from a generalised infection caused by anorexia, an eating disorder in which sufferers obsessively deprive themselves of food in pursuit of an ultra-slim look.
Revised:  Ana Carolina Reston was 21 years old when she died on November 14 in Sau Paulo from a generalised infection caused by anorexia, an eating disorder in which sufferers obsessively deprive themselves of food in pursuit of an ultra-slim look.
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Original:  Ramos died of a heart failure during a fashion show  
Revised:  Ramos died of a heart failure during a fashion show . 
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Original:  Ana Carolina Reston was 21 years old when she died on November 14 in Sau Paulo from a generalized infection caused by anorexia, an eating disorder in which sufferers obsessively deprive themselves of food in pursuit of an ultra-slim look.
Revised:  Ana Carolina Reston was 21 years old when she died on November 14 in Sao Paulo from a generalized infection caused by anorexia, an eating disorder in which sufferers obsessively deprive themselves of food in pursuit of an ultra-slim look.
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Original:  Many of the netizens expressed their delights on BBS and in online chatrooms all over the country.
Revised:  Many of the netizens expressed their delights on online bulletin boards and chatrooms all over the country.
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Original: According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to the what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundations , and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia.
Revised: According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to the what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation , and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia.
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Original: HEFEI, China (Wikinews) After about one week of free access to Chinese Wikipedia, millions of netizens in mainland China woke up today, only to be disappointed again -- "The page cannot be displayed" was the response when they click on links into that well-known online encyclopedia, whose volume has just exceed 100,000 articles 5 days ago.
Revised: HEFEI, China (Wikinews) After about one week of free access to Chinese Wikipedia, millions of netizens in mainland China woke up today, only to be disappointed again -- "The page cannot be displayed" was the response when they click on links into that well-known online encyclopedia, whose volume has just exceded 100,000 articles 5 days ago.
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Original:  According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to the what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation, and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia.
Revised:  According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation, and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia.
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Original: HEFEI, China (Wikinews) After about one week of free access to Chinese Wikipedia, millions of netizens in mainland China woke up today, only to be disappointed again-- "The page cannot be displayed  " was the response when they click on links into that well-known online encyclopedia, whose volume has just exceded 100,000 articles 5 days ago.
Revised: HEFEI, China (Wikinews) After about one week of free access to Chinese Wikipedia, millions of netizens in mainland China woke up today, only to be disappointed again-- "The page cannot be displayed . " was the response when they click on links into that well-known online encyclopedia, whose volume has just exceded 100,000 articles 5 days ago.
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Original: HEFEI, China (Wikinews) After about one week of free access to Chinese Wikipedia, millions of netizens in mainland China woke up today, only to be disappointed again-- "The page cannot be displayed  " was the response when they click on links into that well-known online encyclopedia, whose volume has just exceded 100,000 articles 5 days ago.
Revised: HEFEI, China (Wikinews) After about one week of free access to Chinese Wikipedia, millions of netizens in mainland China woke up today, only to be disappointed again-- "The page cannot be displayed " 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation  , and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia .
Revised:  According to test results and feedback available so far, everything has been reverted to what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation , and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation  , and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia .
Revised:  According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to what it was before mid-October . No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation , and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation  , and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia .
Revised:  According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation is available , and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation  , and the particular censorship of the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia .
Revised:  According to test results and feedbacks available so far, everything has been reverted to what it was before mid-October -- No direct access to any project page under the Wikimedia Foundation , and the keyword "zh.wikipedia.org", which is the url of Chinese Wikipedia .
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Original:  Attempt to search that string in any search engine outside mainland China (Google, Yahoo, AltaVista, etc) would result in a cutoff of link to the site for several minutes.
Revised:  Attempt to search that string in any search engine outside mainland China (Google, Yahoo, AltaVista, etc) results in the blocking of access to that search engine for several minutes.
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Original:  The Chinese government  lifted its ban on all non-Chinese version of Wikipedia in mid-October, and then on Chinese version on November 12.
Revised:  The Chinese government had lifted its ban on all non-Chinese version of Wikipedia in mid-October, and then on Chinese version on November 12.
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Original:  The Chinese government  lifted its ban on all non-Chinese version of Wikipedia in mid-October, and then on Chinese version on November 12.
Revised:  The Chinese government lifted its ban on all non-Chinese versions of Wikipedia in mid-October, and then on Chinese version on November 12.
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Original:  The Chinese government  lifted its ban on all non-Chinese version of Wikipedia in mid-October, and then on Chinese version on November 12.
Revised:  The Chinese government lifted its ban on all non-Chinese version of Wikipedia in mid-October, and the Chinese version on November 12.
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Original:  The 5-day partial absence of censorship (  politically sensitive contents still forbidden) , whether by intention or by accident still unknown,  allowed millions in China to witness the  attainment of 100,000 entries in the free encyclopedia in their own language.
Revised:  Whether the five-day partial absence of censorship ( politically sensitive contents still forbidden) , whether by intention or by accident still unknown, allowed millions in China to witness the attainment of 100,000 entries in the free encyclopedia in their own language.
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Original:  The 5-day partial absence of censorship (  politically sensitive contents still forbidden) , whether by intention or by accident still unknown,  allowed millions in China to witness the  attainment of 100,000 entries in the free encyclopedia in their own language.
Revised:  The 5-day partial absence of censorship ( with politically sensitive contents still forbidden) , whether by intention or by accident still unknown, allowed millions in China to witness the attainment of 100,000 entries in the free encyclopedia in their own language.
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Original:  The 5-day partial absence of censorship (  politically sensitive contents still forbidden) , whether by intention or by accident still unknown,  allowed millions in China to witness the  attainment of 100,000 entries in the free encyclopedia in their own language.
Revised:  The 5-day partial absence of censorship ( politically sensitive contents still forbidden) was intentional or accidental is still unknown, allowed millions in China to witness the attainment of 100,000 entries in the free encyclopedia in their own language.
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Original:  The 5-day partial absence of censorship (  politically sensitive contents still forbidden) , whether by intention or by accident still unknown,  allowed millions in China to witness the  attainment of 100,000 entries in the free encyclopedia in their own language.
Revised:  The 5-day partial absence of censorship ( politically sensitive contents still forbidden) , whether by intention or by accident still unknown, however it had allowed millions in China to witness the attainment of 100,000 entries in the free encyclopedia in their own language.
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Original:  Many of the netizens expressed their delights on online bulletin boards and chatrooms all over the country.
Revised:  Many of the netizens expressed their delight on online bulletin boards and chatrooms all over the country.
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Original:  No reason was given for all that have happened
Revised:  No reason has been given for all that have happened
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Original:  No reason was given for all that have happened
Revised:  No reason was given for all that has happened
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Original:  Many netizens  expressed their delight on online bulletin boards and chatrooms all over the country.
Revised:  Many netizens had expressed their delight on online bulletin boards and chatrooms all over the country.
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Original: HEFEI, China (Wikinews) After about one week of free access to Chinese Wikipedia, millions of netizens in mainland China found their acess blocked once again.
Revised: HEFEI, China (Wikinews) After about one week of free access to Chinese Wikipedia, millions of netizens in mainland China found their access blocked once again.
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Original:  It also brings into question the conduct of his replacment as leader Warren Bradley.
Revised:  It also brings into question the conduct of his replacement as leader, Warren Bradley.
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Original:  Earlier in 2006 the council was the subject of a series of reports fromalleged council insiders via a blog.
Revised:  Earlier in 2006 the council was the subject of a series of reports from alleged council insiders via a blog.
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Original: The Justice Rajinder Sachar committee report states that Indian Muslims are "lagging behind" other religious communities and need to be provided more "equal oppurtunities ".
Revised: The Justice Rajinder Sachar committee report states that Indian Muslims are "lagging behind" other religious communities and need to be provided more "equal opportunities ".
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Original: The Justice Rajinder Sachar committee report states that Indian Muslims are "lagging behind" other religious communities and need to be provided more "equal opportunities".
Revised: The Justice Rajinder Sachar Committee report states that Indian Muslims are "lagging behind" other religious communities and need to be provided more "equal opportunities".
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Original:  The report, however, remains silent on the issue of reservations for Muslims in offices and educational institutions.
Revised:  The report, however, remains silent on the issue of reservations for Muslims in the workplace and educational institutions.
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Original:  Justice Sachar, who led the seven-member team, submitted his report to PM Singh, who praised the comprehensive nature of the study and indicated that it would be tabled in the next session of Parliament
Revised:  Justice Sachar, who led the seven-member team, submitted his report to Prime Minister Manmohan Singh, who praised the comprehensive nature of the study and indicated that it would be tabled in the next session of Parliament
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Original: 5 men, four of which were American contractors and one Austrian contractor, both working for Crescent Security Group , were kidnapped in Iraq after their convoy was attacked and highjacked by militants.
Revised: Four American one Austrian contractors working for Crescent Security Group , were kidnapped in Iraq after their convoy was attacked and highjacked by militants.
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Original: 5 men, four of which were American contractors and one Austrian contractor, both working for Crescent Security Group , were kidnapped in Iraq after their convoy was attacked and highjacked by militants.
Revised: 5 men, four of which were American contractors and one Austrian contractor, both working for Crescent Security Group were kidnapped in Iraq after their convoy was attacked and highjacked by militants.
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Original: Four American one Austrian contractors working for Crescent Security Group were kidnapped in Iraq after their convoy was attacked and highjacked by militants.
Revised: Four American and an Austrian contractors working for Crescent Security Group were kidnapped in Iraq after their convoy was attacked and highjacked by militants.
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Original: Four American and an Austrian contractors working for  Crescent Security Group were kidnapped in Iraq after their convoy was attacked and highjacked by militants.
Revised: Four American and an Austrian contractors working for the Crescent Security Group were kidnapped in Iraq after their convoy was attacked and highjacked by militants.
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Original: Image:Sony PlayStation 3.jpg|PlayStation 3 on display at the Tokyo Game Show]] The new PlayStation 3 is getting more people lining up in stores than people walking out. eBay has pages full of PlayStation 3s, retailing at US$500-$600,auctioning at about US$3,000 up to US$5,000.
Revised: Image:Sony PlayStation 3.jpg|PlayStation 3 on display at the Tokyo Game Show]] The new PlayStation 3 is getting more people lining up in stores than people walking out. EBay has pages full of PlayStation 3s, retailing at US$500-$600,auctioning at about US$3,000 up to US$5,000.
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Original:  Ebay is restricting PlayStation 3's to only experienced ebay sellers with high ratings.
Revised:  EBay is restricting PlayStation 3's to only experienced ebay sellers with high ratings.
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Original:  Ebay is restricting PlayStation 3's to only experienced ebay sellers with high ratings.
Revised:  Ebay is restricting PlayStation 3's to only experienced eBay sellers with high ratings.
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Original:  The listing has to include a photo of the pre-order receipt and the seller must guarantee shipment within 30 days starting from the date of purchase  
Revised:  The listing has to include a photo of the pre-order receipt and the seller must guarantee shipment within 30 days starting from the date of purchase . 
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Original:  The local medical health officer advised that tap water not be used for anything.
Revised:  The region's Chief Medical Health Officer has advised that tap water not be used for anything.
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Original:  So people need to be aware of that, although it's their choice," warned Dr. Patricia Daly , medical health officer for Vancouver Coastal Health Authority . "If I'm asked, I'm telling the public: Don't drink the water from the tap at this time.
Revised:  So people need to be aware of that, although it's their choice," warned Dr. Patricia Daly . "If I'm asked, I'm telling the public: Don't drink the water from the tap at this time.
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Original:  Starbucks, a coffee shop, in downtown Vancouver had to stop serving coffee and grocery stores had to turn off the produce sprayers used to cool vegetables.
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Original:  BC Hydroare busy at the moment repairing power and telephone lines blown down in the heavy winds.
Revised:  BC Hydro, the province's primary electrical provider, was busy repairing power and telephone lines blown down in the heavy winds.
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Original:  It left over 220,000 customers without electricity .
Revised:  Over 220,000 customers without electricity .
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Original: Severe rainfall on the 16th of November has led to a water quality warning affecting more than two million people living in the Greater Vancouvermetropolitan region.
Revised: Over two million people living in the Greater Vancouvermetropolitan region.
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Original:  The region's Chief Medical Health Officer has advised that tap water not be used for anything.
Revised:  Chief Medical Health Officer has advised that tap water not be used for anything.
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Original:  " We know that with turbidity levels this high there is an increased risk of gastrointestinal illness.
Revised:  " an increased risk of gastrointestinal illness.
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Original:  So people need to be aware of that, although it's their choice, " warned Dr. Patricia Daly.
Revised:  " warned Dr. Patricia Daly.
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Original:  So people need to be aware of that, although it's their choice, " warned Dr. Patricia Daly.
Revised:  So people need to be aware of that, although it's their choice, " She further advised residents to
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Original:  " If I'm asked, I'm telling the public: Don't drink the water from the tap at this time.
Revised:  " 
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Original:  Many of Vancouver's hundreds of coffee shops were quiet .
Revised:  Many of Vancouver's hundreds of coffee shops were also quieted .
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Original:   The Greater Vancouver area has received a total of 236.8mm of rain this month.
Revised:  The Greater Vancouver area has received 236.8mm of rain this month.
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Original:  The rainfall recordof 350.8mm was set in 1983 , according to measurements taken at Vancouver International Airport . BC Hydro, the province's primary electrical provider, was busy repairing power and telephone lines blown down in the heavy winds.
Revised:  The rainfall recordof 350.8mm was set in 1983 when 350.8mm rainfall was recorded at Vancouver International Airport . BC Hydro, the province's primary electrical provider, was busy repairing power and telephone lines blown down in the heavy winds.
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