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Original:  She has also promised a state economic stimulus package that would support New York's education , as well as put forth funding for the environment and a new project that would create a high-speed railway system linking New York City with Albany, the  capital.
Revised:  She has also promised a state economic stimulus package that would support New York's education as well as put forth funding for the environment and a new project that would create a high-speed railway system linking New York City with Albany, the capital.
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Original:  She has also promised a state economic stimulus package that would support New York's education , as well as put forth funding for the environment and a new project that would create a high-speed railway system linking New York City with Albany, the  capital.
Revised:  She has also promised a state economic stimulus package that would support New York's education , as well as put forth funding for the environment and a new project that would create a high-speed rail system linking New York City with Albany, the capital.
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Original:  She has also promised a state economic stimulus package that would support New York's education , as well as put forth funding for the environment and a new project that would create a high-speed railway system linking New York City with Albany, the  capital.
Revised:  She has also promised a state economic stimulus package that would support New York's education , as well as put forth funding for the environment and a new project that would create a high-speed railway system linking New York City with Albany, the state capital.
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Original:  Gillibrand, 42, was a member of the House of Representatives from Hudson and is, like Clinton, a member of the Democratic Party.
Revised:  Gillibrand, 42, was a member of the House of Representatives from and is, like Clinton, a member of the Democratic Party.
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Original:  This selection came after Caroline Kennedy , the daughter of former President John F. Kennedy and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from the consideration for the seat on January 21 due to unspecified personal reasons.
Revised:  This selection came after , the daughter of former President John F. Kennedy and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from the consideration for the seat on January 21 due to unspecified personal reasons.
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Original:  This selection came after Caroline Kennedy , the daughter of former President John F. Kennedy and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from the consideration for the seat on January 21 due to unspecified personal reasons.
Revised:  This selection came after Caroline Kennedy , the daughter of former President and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from the consideration for the seat on January 21 due to unspecified personal reasons.
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Original:  Shame on Governor Paterson," stated Gloria Cruz of the Million Mom March which promoted tighter restrictions on the private ownership of firearms.
Revised:  Shame on Governor Paterson," stated Gloria Cruz of the which promoted tighter restrictions on the private ownership of firearms.
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Original: June 16, 2005 Canada's communications regulator, the CRTC has approved three applications for subscription-based satellite radio satellite radio services.
Revised:  Canada's communications regulator, the CRTC has approved three applications for subscription-based satellite radio satellite radio services.
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Original: Canada's communications regulator, the CRTC has approved three applications for subscription-based satellite radio satellite radio services.
Revised: Canada's communications regulator, the CRTC has approved three applications for subscription-based satellite radio services.
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Original: Canada's communications regulator, the CRTC  has approved three applications for subscription-based satellite radio services.
Revised: Canada's communications regulator, the CRTC , has approved three applications for subscription-based satellite radio services.
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Original: __NOTOC__ [[File:Americanized_Encyclopædia_Britannica_title_page.jpg|Title page of the New American edition of the Encylopædia Britannica (1899)]] Encyclopædia Britannica  , the authoritative reference book first published in 1768, is  to let readers edit its entries, Jorge Cauz, its president said Friday, as it battles to keep pace with online Internet encyclopedia projects like Wikipedia.
Revised: __NOTOC__ [[File:Americanized_Encyclopædia_Britannica_title_page.jpg|Title page of the New American edition of the Encylopædia Britannica (1899)]] Encyclopædia Britannica (EB) , the authoritative reference book first published in 1768, is to let readers edit its entries, Jorge Cauz, its president said Friday, as it battles to keep pace with online Internet encyclopedia projects like Wikipedia.
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Original: __NOTOC__ [[File:Americanized_Encyclopædia_Britannica_title_page.jpg|Title page of the New American edition of the Encylopædia Britannica (1899)]] Encyclopædia Britannica  , the authoritative reference book first published in 1768, is  to let readers edit its entries, Jorge Cauz, its president said Friday, as it battles to keep pace with online Internet encyclopedia projects like Wikipedia.
Revised: __NOTOC__ [[File:Americanized_Encyclopædia_Britannica_title_page.jpg|Title page of the New American edition of the Encylopædia Britannica (1899)]] Encyclopædia Britannica , the authoritative reference book first published in 1768, is planning to let readers edit its entries, Jorge Cauz, its president said Friday, as it battles to keep pace with online Internet encyclopedia projects like Wikipedia.
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Original:  From next week, readers, visitors and contributing experts to EB's free, online version, Britannica.com, will be allowed to submit proposed changes and contributions to Britannica editors, who will then review the edits and make the necessary alterations.
Revised:  Starting next week, readers, visitors and contributing experts to EB's free, online version, Britannica.com, will be allowed to submit proposed changes and contributions to Britannica editors, who will then review the edits and make the necessary alterations.
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Original:  Britannica's unveiled plan is meant to let readers help keep the reference work up to date by collaboration.
Revised:  This move is meant to let readers help keep the reference work up to date by collaboration.
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Original:  Britannica's unveiled plan is meant to let readers help keep the reference work up to date by collaboration.
Revised:  Britannica's unveiled plan is meant to let readers help keep the reference work up-to-date by collaboration.
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Original:  In expanding and maintaining entries online, users jointly assisting or whose editorial suggestions are accepted and published entirely or in part , will be credited by name in the section of each article that lists contributors.
Revised:  In expanding and maintaining entries online, users whose editorial suggestions are accepted and published entirely or in part , will be credited by name in the section of each article that lists contributors.
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Original:  In expanding and maintaining entries online, users jointly assisting or whose editorial suggestions are accepted and published entirely or in part , will be credited by name in the section of each article that lists contributors.
Revised:  In expanding and maintaining entries online, users jointly assisting or whose editorial suggestions are accepted and published entirely or in part will be credited by name in the section of each article that lists contributors.
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Original:  In expanding and maintaining entries online, users jointly assisting or whose editorial suggestions are accepted and published entirely or in part , will be credited by name in the section of each article that lists contributors.
Revised:  In expanding and maintaining entries online, users jointly assisting or whose editorial suggestions are accepted and published entirely or in part , will be credited by name in the section of the article that lists contributors.
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Original:  The new website features will enable the inclusion of user generated content, and will be available on the site within the next twenty four hours.
Revised:  The new website features will be available on the site within the next twenty four hours.
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Original:  The new website features will enable the inclusion of user generated content, and will be available on the site within the next twenty four hours.
Revised:  The new website features will enable the inclusion of user generated content, and will be available on the site within the next twenty-four hours.
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Original:  Britannica, however, explained  it would not allow a Wikipedia form of editing which allows a wide range of users to make contributions to its online encyclopaedia.
Revised:  Britannica, however, explained that it would not allow a Wikipedia form of editing which allows a wide range of users to make contributions to its online encyclopaedia.
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Original:  Its novel user choice includes enrollment of experts in a reward scheme and invitation of selected readers to contribute.
Revised:  Its novel user choice will include enrollment of experts in a reward scheme and invitation of selected readers to contribute.
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Original:  wrote Jorge Cauz in his blog entry . "We believe that the creation and documentation of knowledge is a collaborative process but not a democratic one," Cauz noted, explaining further that "these experts would sit alongside the encyclopaedia entries and the official material would carry a 'Britannica Checked' stamp, to distinguish it from the user-generated content."
Revised:  wrote Jorge Cauz in his blog . "We believe that the creation and documentation of knowledge is a collaborative process but not a democratic one," Cauz noted, explaining further that "these experts would sit alongside the encyclopaedia entries and the official material would carry a 'Britannica Checked' stamp, to distinguish it from the user-generated content."
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Original:  Cauz also announced the unveiling by Britannica of a beta , or trial version of what will become the finished Britannica Online website .
Revised:  Cauz also announced the unveiling by Britannica of a beta (trial) version of what will become the finished Britannica Online website .
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Original:  He also planned a re-design of the Britannica web site and the creation of the  web-based tools so that readers or users can upload their own reference materials.
Revised:  He also planned a re-design and the web-based tools so that readers or users can upload their own reference materials.
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Original:  He also planned a re-design of the Britannica web site and the creation of the  web-based tools so that readers or users can upload their own reference materials.
Revised:  He also planned a re-design of the Britannica web site and the creation of the addition of web-based tools so that readers or users can upload their own reference materials.
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Original:  He also planned a re-design of the Britannica web site and the creation of the  web-based tools so that readers or users can upload their own reference materials.
Revised:  He also planned a re-design of the Britannica web site and the creation of the web-based tools for readers and users to upload their own reference materials.
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Original:  Much of online contents  will eventually appear in Britannica's printed version  which is published every two years.
Revised:  Much of online contents Much of the online content will eventually appear in Britannica's printed version which is published every two years.
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Original:  Much of online contents  will eventually appear in Britannica's printed version  which is published every two years.
Revised:  Much of online contents will eventually appear in Britannica's printed version , which is published every two years.
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Original:  “I think the future is likely going to be that in every media segment there has to be a symbiotic relationship between editor and reader,” said Cauz, adding that each article will have a detailed history with changes and who made them, as in Wikipedia.
Revised:  “I think the future is likely going to be that in every media segment there has to be a symbiotic relationship between editor and reader,” said Cauz, adding that each article will have a detailed history showing changes and who made them, as in Wikipedia.
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Original:  Unlike Wikipedia  which allows anonymous edits through  user's IP address being logged, Britannica's new features strictly require contributors or users to register, revealing their real names and addresses, prior to modifying or creating their own articles.
Revised:  Unlike Wikipedia , which allows anonymous edits through user's IP address being logged, Britannica's new features strictly require contributors or users to register, revealing their real names and addresses, prior to modifying or creating their own articles.
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Original:  Unlike Wikipedia  which allows anonymous edits through  user's IP address being logged, Britannica's new features strictly require contributors or users to register, revealing their real names and addresses, prior to modifying or creating their own articles.
Revised:  Unlike Wikipedia which allows anonymous edits through a user's IP address being logged, Britannica's new features strictly require contributors or users to register, revealing their real names and addresses, prior to modifying or creating their own articles.
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Original:  Cauz also faulted Google for linking Wikipedia higher in pagerank than Britannica.
Revised:  Cauz faulted Google for linking Wikipedia higher in pagerank than Britannica.
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Original:  Cauz also faulted Google for linking Wikipedia higher in pagerank than Britannica.
Revised:  Cauz also faulted Google for setting Wikipedia higher in pagerank than Britannica.
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Original:  He explained that  in EB, new efforts to participate in online collaboration of encyclopedic content , are deemed by recognizing experts as  requirement in order to achieve objectivity and high quality.
Revised:  He explained that , in EB, new efforts to participate in online collaboration of encyclopedic content , are deemed by recognizing experts as requirement in order to achieve objectivity and high quality.
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Original:  He explained that  in EB, new efforts to participate in online collaboration of encyclopedic content , are deemed by recognizing experts as  requirement in order to achieve objectivity and high quality.
Revised:  He explained that in EB, new efforts to participate in online collaboration of encyclopedic content are deemed by recognizing experts as requirement in order to achieve objectivity and high quality.
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Original:  He explained that  in EB, new efforts to participate in online collaboration of encyclopedic content , are deemed by recognizing experts as  requirement in order to achieve objectivity and high quality.
Revised:  He explained that in EB, new efforts to participate in online collaboration of encyclopedic content , are deemed by recognizing experts as a requirement in order to achieve objectivity and high quality.
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Original:  The 241 year old publication, Encyclopædia Britannica, is a general English-language encyclopaedia published by a privately held company, Encyclopædia Britannica, Inc. and is the oldest English-language encyclopaedia still in print.
Revised:  The 241-year-old publication, Encyclopædia Britannica, is a general English-language encyclopaedia published by a privately held company, Encyclopædia Britannica, Inc. and is the oldest English-language encyclopaedia still in print.
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Original:  The Encyclopædia Britannica Online Web site has more than 120,000 articles and is updated regularly.
Revised:  The Encyclopædia Britannica Online website has more than 120,000 articles and is updated regularly.
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Original: Much of the online content will eventually appear in Britannica's printed version, which is published every two years.
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Original: Articles developed by Britiannica 's own editors also appear in the printed volumes, which are published every two years, though material created by what Cauz called their "community of scholars" will only appear online.
Revised: Articles developed by Britannica 's own editors also appear in the printed volumes, which are published every two years, though material created by what Cauz called their "community of scholars" will only appear online.
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Original:  It is a how-to guide that explains the process of contributing to the internet encyclopedia Wikipedia       ]  ]  ] [ [   [[     ]]  . " For anyone who is interested inbecoming part of the noble experiment, this book is an excellent introduction, " wrote reviewer Robert Slade.
Revised:  It is a how-to guide that explains the process of contributing to the internet encyclopedia Wikipedia ] could ] ] [ [ [[ ]] . " For anyone who is interested inbecoming part of the noble experiment, this book is an excellent introduction, " wrote reviewer Robert Slade.
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Original:  It is a how-to guide that explains the process of contributing to the internet encyclopedia Wikipedia       ]  ]  ] [ [   [[     ]]  . " For anyone who is interested inbecoming part of the noble experiment, this book is an excellent introduction, " wrote reviewer Robert Slade.
Revised:  It is a how-to guide that explains the process of contributing to the internet encyclopedia Wikipedia ] ...] ] [ [ [[ ]] . " For anyone who is interested inbecoming part of the noble experiment, this book is an excellent introduction, " wrote reviewer Robert Slade.
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Original:  It is a how-to guide that explains the process of contributing to the internet encyclopedia Wikipedia       ]  ]  ] [ [   [[     ]]  . " For anyone who is interested inbecoming part of the noble experiment, this book is an excellent introduction, " wrote reviewer Robert Slade.
Revised:  It is a how-to guide that explains the process of contributing to the internet encyclopedia Wikipedia ] ] ..] [ [ [[ ]] . " For anyone who is interested inbecoming part of the noble experiment, this book is an excellent introduction, " wrote reviewer Robert Slade.
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Original:  It is a how-to guide that explains the process of contributing to the internet encyclopedia Wikipedia       ]  ]  ] [ [   [[     ]]  . " For anyone who is interested inbecoming part of the noble experiment, this book is an excellent introduction, " wrote reviewer Robert Slade.
Revised:  It is a how-to guide that explains the process of contributing to the internet encyclopedia Wikipedia ] ] ] [ [stories [[ ]] . " For anyone who is interested inbecoming part of the noble experiment, this book is an excellent introduction, " wrote reviewer Robert Slade.
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Original:  Mr. Wales said that a poll revealed 60 percent of Wikipedians favored the new proposal and that it would be a “time limited test.”
Revised:  Wales said that a poll revealed 60 percent of Wikipedians favored the new proposal and that it would be a “time limited test.”
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Original:  Mr Wales issued a statement requesting implementation of the extension: “To the Wikimedia Foundation: per the poll of the English Wikipedia community and upon my personal recommendation, please turn on the flagged revisions feature as approved in the poll.”
Revised:  Wales issued a statement requesting implementation of the extension: “To the Wikimedia Foundation: per the poll of the English Wikipedia community and upon my personal recommendation, please turn on the flagged revisions feature as approved in the poll.”
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Original:  [[File:Wikimedia_Foundation_organization_chart.svg|An organization chart for the Wikimedia Foundation as of 11 January 2008.]] As of February 2nd, 2009, his request hasn't been implemented and has been the subject of considerable debate within the editing community .
Revised:  [[File:Wikimedia_Foundation_organization_chart.svg|An organization chart for the Wikimedia Foundation as of 11 January 2008.]] As of February 2, his request hasn't been implemented and has been the subject of considerable debate within the editing community .
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Original:  [[File:Wikimedia_Foundation_organization_chart.svg|An organization chart for the Wikimedia Foundation as of 11 January 2008.]] As of February 2nd, 2009, his request hasn't been implemented and has been the subject of considerable debate within the editing community .
Revised:  [[File:Wikimedia_Foundation_organization_chart.svg|An organization chart for the Wikimedia Foundation as of 11 January 2008.]] As of February 2nd, 2009, his request hasn't been implemented .
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Original:  Mr Wales, however, pointed out that the system he was proposing was only for biographies of living people , for Wales may be right to treat breaking-news stories differently .
Revised:  Wales, however, pointed out that the system he was proposing was only for biographies of living people , for Wales may be right to treat breaking-news stories differently .
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Original:  Mr Wales, however, pointed out that the system he was proposing was only for biographies of living people , for Wales may be right to treat breaking-news stories differently .
Revised:  Mr Wales, however, pointed out that the system he was proposing was only for biographies of living people .
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Original:  Wikipedia has provided amazingly comprehensive and up-to-minute entries on the Virginia Tech massacre in April 2007 and the Mumbai terrorist attacks this past November as the events were still taking place.
Revised:  Wikipedia has provided comprehensive and up-to-minute entries on the Virginia Tech massacre in April 2007 and the Mumbai terrorist attacks this past November as the events were still taking place.
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Original:  The debate on the English Wikipedia is not over, and from all appearances will continue long after a decision on the restrictions is made.
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Original:  Wales' position and that of many others is summed up in the following quote, an attempt to frame the debate as resting on moral principles: "As an aside," he wrote, "I consider our BLP issue to be so important that I think it is actually unethical to not use a tool which holds great promise for helping with the problem, now that it has been successfully tested elsewhere.
Revised:  Wales' position is that "I consider our BLP issue to be so important that I think it is actually unethical to not use a tool which holds great promise for helping with the problem, now that it has been successfully tested elsewhere.
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Original: Eyewitness Hans Staelens told reporters he had noticed a suspicious character in the street where the day care centre 'Fable land ' was located.
Revised: Eyewitness Hans Staelens told reporters he had noticed a suspicious character in the street where the day care centre 'Fable Land ' was located.
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Original:  He was not under the influence of drugs or alcohol.
Revised:  Kim D. was not under the influence of drugs or alcohol.
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Original:  Victims One child and one woman were died in the day care centre itself, another child in the hospital.
Revised:  Victims One child and one woman died in the day care centre itself, another child in the hospital.
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Original:  Victims One child and one woman were died in the day care centre itself, another child in the hospital.
Revised:  Victims One child and one woman were died in the day care centre itself, with another child dying in hospital.
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