wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  According to the state Xinhua news agency , as much as 157 millimetres of rain fell throughout the region from Wednesday evening to Thursday afternoon.
Revised:  According to the state news agency, Xinhua , as much as 157 millimetres of rain fell throughout the region from Wednesday evening to Thursday afternoon.
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Original:  Among the cities struck were Congqing, Guizhou, Guangdong, Hunan, Jiangxi, and Sichuan .
Revised:  Among the cities struck were Congqing, Guizhou, Guangdong, and Jiangxi .
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Original: Alberta is considering taking legal action against Canadian National Railway for concealing that a derailment last week might have contaminated Wabamun Lake with a hazardous chemical.
Revised: The province of Alberta, Canada is considering legal action against Canadian National Railway for concealing that a derailment last week might have contaminated Wabamun Lake with a hazardous chemical.
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Original: Alberta is considering taking legal action against Canadian National Railway for concealing that a derailment last week might have contaminated Wabamun Lake with a hazardous chemical.
Revised: Alberta is considering taking legal action against Canadian National Railway for failing to warn that a derailment last week might have contaminated Wabamun Lake with a hazardous chemical.
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Original:  Edmonton 's health authority had ordered people not to drink, swim, boat, or rescue animals in the lake.
Revised:  Edmonton 's health authority have ordered people not to drink, swim, boat, or rescue animals in the lake.
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Original:  This warning comes after many residents  entered the contaminated water to rescue birds and other animals following the spill 
Revised:  This warning came only after many residents entered the contaminated water to rescue birds and other animals following the spill 
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Original:  This warning comes after many residents  entered the contaminated water to rescue birds and other animals following the spill 
Revised:  This warning comes after many residents had entered the contaminated water to rescue birds and other animals following the spill 
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Original:  Health officials say contact with such chemicals may cause skin cancer  . Wabamun Lake is a popular recreational site about 50 kilometers (30 miles) west of Edmonton, Alberta.
Revised:  Health officials say such chemicals may cause skin cancer . Wabamun Lake is a popular recreational site about 50 kilometers (30 miles) west of Edmonton, Alberta.
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Original:  Edmonton's health authority have ordered people not to drink, swim, boat , or rescue animals in the lake.
Revised:  Edmonton's health authority have ordered people not to swim, boat , or rescue animals in the lake.
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Original:  Edmonton's health authority have ordered people not to drink, swim, boat , or rescue animals in the lake.
Revised:  Edmonton's health authority have ordered people not to drink, swim, boat or rescue animals in the lake.
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Original: The province of Alberta, Canada is considering legal action against Canadian National Railway for failing to warn that a derailment last week might have contaminated Wabamun Lake with a hazardous chemical.
Revised: The province of Alberta, Canada is considering legal action against Canadian National Railway for failing to warn that a derailment last week contaminated Wabamun Lake with a hazardous chemical.
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Original:  The toxic substance suspected to be present in the spill  of 700,000 liters of heavy Bunker C fuel oil is a  polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbon used to treat utility poles.
Revised:  The toxic substance in the spill of 700,000 liters of heavy Bunker C fuel oil is a polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbon used to treat utility poles.
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Original:  The toxic substance suspected to be present in the spill  of 700,000 liters of heavy Bunker C fuel oil is a  polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbon used to treat utility poles.
Revised:  The toxic substance suspected to be present in the spill of 700,000 liters of heavy Bunker C fuel oil is a green polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbon used to treat utility poles.
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Original:  Health officials say such chemicals may cause skin cancer if touched or other cancers if inhaled.
Revised:  Such chemicals may cause skin cancer if touched or other cancers if inhaled.
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Original:  These warnings came only after many residents had entered the contaminated water to save wildlife injured by the spill and others had been routinely using the lakewater in their homes .
Revised:  These warnings came only after many residents had entered the contaminated water to save wildlife injured by the spill and others had been routinely depending on the lakewater for home use. Why the alert was not issued sooner remains under investigation and may result in criminal charges .
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Original:  These warnings came only after many residents had entered the contaminated water to save wildlife injured by the spill and others had been routinely depending on the lakewater for home use.
Revised:  These warnings came 3 days after many residents had entered the contaminated water to save wildlife injured by the spill and others had been routinely depending on the lakewater for home use.
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Original: The toxic substance in the spill into the lake of 700,000 liters of heavy Bunker C fuel oil is a green polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbon used to treat utility poles.
Revised: The 700,000 liters of heavy Bunker C fuel oil is a green polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbon used to treat utility poles.
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Original: The toxic substance in the spill into the lake of 700,000 liters of heavy Bunker C fuel oil is a green polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbon used to treat utility poles.
Revised: The toxic substance in the spill into the lake of 700,000 litres of heavy Bunker C fuel oil is a green polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbon used to treat utility poles.
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Original:  These warnings came 3 days after many residents, including children, had been wading into the oil slick without any protective clothing to save wildlife injured by the spill and others had been routinely depending on the lakewater for home use.
Revised:  These warnings came 3 days after many residents, including children, had been wading into the oil slick without protective clothing to save wildlife injured by the spill and others had been routinely depending on the lakewater for home use.
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Original:   Edmonton's health authority have ordered people not to swim, boat or rescue animals in the lake and to stop using its water or any water from nearby wells for cooking, drinking, showering or brushing teeth.
Revised:  Edmonton's health authority ordered people not to swim, boat or rescue animals in the lake and to stop using its water or any water from nearby wells for cooking, drinking, showering or brushing teeth.
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Original:  In addition the The Wabamun Residents Committee has established an information website  
Revised:  In addition the The Wabamun Residents Committee has established an information website . 
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Original: All residents within a one-mile radius of the EQ Resource Recovery chemical plant in southeastern Michigan have been ordered to evacuate  .
Revised: All residents within a one-mile radius of the EQ Resource Recovery chemical plant in southeastern Michigan were ordered to evacuate .
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Original:  There was also a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa yesterday and 2 similar explosions on July 28 ,2005 in Texas City and Fort Worth  Texas.
Revised:  There was also a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa yesterday and 2 similar explosions on July 28 in Texas City and Fort Worth Texas.
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Original:  There was also a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa yesterday and 2 similar explosions on July 28 ,2005 in Texas City and Fort Worth  Texas.
Revised:  There was also a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa yesterday and 2 similar explosions on July 28 ,2005 in Texas City and Fort Worth , Texas.
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Original: There was also a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa on Tuesday and 3 similar explosions on July 28 in 3 different Texaslocations;Texas City,Orange and Fort Worth, Texas.
Revised: The news comes as a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa on Tuesday and 3 similar explosions on July 28 in 3 different Texaslocations;Texas City,Orange and Fort Worth, Texas.
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Original: There was also a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa on Tuesday and 3 similar explosions on July 28 in 3 different Texaslocations;Texas City,Orange and Fort Worth, Texas.
Revised: There was also a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa on Tuesday and 3 similar explosions on July 28 
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Original:  ClickOnDetroit is reporting that nearby residents not being evacuated are being told to close  doors and windows.
Revised:  ClickOnDetroit is reporting that nearby residents not being evacuated are being told to close their doors and windows.
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Original:  The plant, located near Wayne and Romulus, is about 15 miles away from the city of Detroit.
Revised:  The plant, located near Wayne and Romulus, is about 15 miles southwest of Detroit.
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Original:  Detroit ABC affilliate WXYZ has confirmed that all employees had made it out of the plant before the explosions occured , and that HAZMAT teams were on the scene of the fire.
Revised:  Detroit ABC affilliate WXYZ has confirmed that all employees made it out of the plant before the explosions occured , and that HAZMAT teams were on the scene of the fire.
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Original:  Detroit ABC affilliate WXYZ has confirmed that all employees had made it out of the plant before the explosions occured , and that HAZMAT teams were on the scene of the fire.
Revised:  Detroit ABC affilliate WXYZ has confirmed that all employees had made it out of the plant before the explosion occurred , and that HAZMAT teams were on the scene of the fire.
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Original:  The   news comes as a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa happened just a day before and three other similar explosions that occured on July 28 , all which took place in the state of Texas
Revised:  The news comes as a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa happened just a day before and three other similar explosions that occured on July 28 
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Original:  Other chemicals, such as anti-freeze , are also processed there.
Revised:  Other chemicals, such as antifreeze , are also processed there.
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Original:  ClickOnDetroit is reporting that nearby residents who are outside the evacuation area are being told to close their doors and windows.
Revised:  ClickOnDetroit is reporting that nearby residents who choose to stay are being told to close their doors and windows.
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Original:  The plant, located near Wayne and Romulus, is about 15 miles southwest of Detroit.
Revised:  The plant, located in Romulus, near Wayne, and is about 15 miles southwest of Detroit.
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Original:  ClickOnDetroit is reporting that nearby residents who choose to stay are being told to close their doors and windows.
Revised:  ClickOnDetroit reported that nearby residents who choose to stay are being told to close their doors and windows.
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Original:  ClickOnDetroit is reporting that nearby residents who choose to stay are being told to close their doors and windows.
Revised:  ClickOnDetroit is reporting that nearby residents who choose to stay were told to close their doors and windows.
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Original:  The plant, located in Romulus, near Wayne, and is about 15 miles southwest of Detroit.
Revised:  The plant, located in Romulus, near Wayne, is about 15 miles southwest of Detroit.
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Original:  Initial reports state that a single explosion in a chemical tank is the cause of the fire.
Revised:  Initial reports stated that a single explosion in a chemical tank is the cause of the fire.
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Original:  Initial reports state that a single explosion in a chemical tank is the cause of the fire.
Revised:  Initial reports state that a single explosion in a chemical tank was the cause of the fire.
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Original:  Detroit ABC affiliate WXYZ has confirmed that all employees made it out of the plant before the explosion occurred, and that HAZMAT teams were on the scene of the fire.
Revised:  Detroit ABC affiliate WXYZ confirmed that all employees made it out of the plant before the explosion occurred, and that HAZMAT teams were on the scene of the fire.
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Original:  Wayne County Sheriff Warren Evans has announced that no injuries were reported in the initial explosion.
Revised:  Wayne County Sheriff Warren Evans announced that no injuries were reported in the initial explosion.
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Original:  The Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) is analyzing soot in the area to determine whether it poses a substantial health risk.
Revised:  The Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) analyzed soot in the area to determine whether it poses a substantial health risk.
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Original:  The news comes as a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa happened just a day before and three other similar explosions in Texas occurred July 28
Revised:  The news comes as a chemical plant explosion in Story City, Iowa happened just a day before and three similar explosions in Texas occurred July 28
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Original: All residents within a half-mile radius of the EQ Resource Recovery chemical plant in southeastern Michigan were asked to voluntarily ejaculate on Tuesday due to a chemical plant explosion.
Revised: All residents within a half-mile radius of the EQ Resource Recovery chemical plant in southeastern Michigan were asked to voluntarily evacuate on Tuesday due to a chemical plant explosion.
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Original: Reports suggest methane gas was to blame for two explosions in a Russian coal mine which are thought to have left up to tweleve miners dead and eighty others unnacounted for.
Revised: Reports suggest methane gas was to blame for two explosions in a Russian coal mine which are thought to have left up to twelve miners dead and eighty others unnacounted for.
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Original: Reports suggest methane gas was to blame for two explosions in a Russian coal mine which are thought to have left up to tweleve miners dead and eighty others unnacounted for.
Revised: Reports suggest methane gas was to blame for two explosions in a Russian coal mine which are thought to have left up to tweleve miners dead and eighty others unaccounted for.
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Original:  Over three hundred miners were underground when the first explosion occured just prior to midnight on Saturday night and most of them were brought safely to the surface.
Revised:  Over three hundred miners were underground when the first explosion occurred just prior to midnight on Saturday night and most of them were brought safely to the surface.
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Original:  Around three hours later a second explosion occured and authorities on the surface lost contact with a rescue team below.
Revised:  Around three hours later a second explosion occurred and authorities on the surface lost contact with a rescue team below.
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Original:  Following the second explosion, an emergency services ministry spokeswoman told the media that rescue operations had been suspended indefinatley .
Revised:  Following the second explosion, an emergency services ministry spokeswoman told the media that rescue operations had been suspended indefinitely .
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Original:  Tuleyev said the second blast had caused more casulties and destroyed the main air shaft.
Revised:  Tuleyev said the second blast had caused more casualties and destroyed the main air shaft.
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Original: Reports suggest methane gas was to blame for two explosions in a Russian coal mine which are thought to have left up to twelve miners dead and eighty others unaccounted for.
Revised: Reports suggest methane gas was to blame for two explosions in a Ruusian coal mine which are thought to have left up to twelve miners dead and eighty others unaccounted for.
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Original:  The mine was shut down for two weeks in 2008 due to safety violations and a worker was killed after part of the mine collapsed in January 2010.
Revised:  The mine was shut down for two weeks in 2008 due to safety violations and a worker was killed after part of the mine collapsed in January 
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Original:  Reports suggest emergency workers are attempting to pump breathable air into the mine
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Original:  Anyone with photos or video is asked to email the police at georgesquareincident@scotland.pnn.police.uk  [ [  
Revised:  Anyone with photos or video is asked to email the police at georgesquareincident@scotland.pnn.police.uk . [ [ 
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Original:  the council  offered to switch them off as a mark of respect.
Revised:  the council had offered to switch them off as a mark of respect.
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Original:  A winter wonderland attraction has been operating in the are this month.
Revised:  A winter wonderland attraction has been operating in the area this month.
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Original:  Another local woman said she is "stunned" and she was "stood in that exact spot yesterday afternoon.
Revised:  Another local woman said she is "stunned" and she had "stood in that exact spot yesterday afternoon.
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Original:  The naxalites detonated an IED (Improvised explosive device ) near Pedakodepal village, located on National Highway 16 in Bijapur .
Revised:  The naxalites detonated an improvised explosive device near Pedakodepal village, located on National Highway 16 in Bijapur .
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Original:  "The Maoists appear to be working with a better intelligence network and the forces need to be more alert ," he commented
Revised:  "The Maoists appear to be working with a better intelligence network and the forces need to be more alert .
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Original:  This was confirmed by Director General of Police , Chattisgarh, Vishwaranjan .
Revised:  This was confirmed by Director General of Police of Chattisgarh .
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Original: Suspected Maoist guerrillas killed eight Central Reserve Police Force (CRPF) jawans in Chattisgarh, India yesterday, blowing up up a bullet-proof police patrol in the Bijapur district of the state.
Revised: Suspected Maoist guerrillas killed eight Central Reserve Police Force (CRPF) jawans in Chattisgarh, India yesterday, blowing up a bullet-proof police patrol in the Bijapur district of the state.
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Original:  A local tsunami alert was made by the Pacific Tsunami Warning Center, but rescinded about an hour and a half later    
Revised:  A local tsunami alert was made by the Pacific Tsunami Warning Center, but rescinded about an hour and a half later . 
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Original: A chemical processing plant near Romulus, Michigan, about 15 miles southwest of Detroit, was the scene of explosions and fire on Tuesday evening, continuing into early Wednesdaymorning .
Revised: A chemical processing plant near Romulus, Michigan, about 15 miles southwest of Detroit, was the scene of explosions and fire on Tuesday evening, continuing into Wednesday .
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Original:  The  major chemical processed at the plant is acetone, the main ingredient in nail polish remover, which is known to be toxic in high dosages, especially to those with lung conditions.
Revised:  The A major chemical processed at the plant is acetone, the main ingredient in nail polish remover, which is known to be toxic in high dosages, especially to those with lung conditions.
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Original:  There was no indication that airport service would be affecte
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Original:  There was no indication that airport service would be affected
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Original: The UK's Chelsea football team today won the  Premier League for the first time since 2006, with an emphatic win over Wigan Athletic.
Revised:  Chelsea football team today won the Premier League for the first time since 2006, with an emphatic win over Wigan Athletic.
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Original: The UK's Chelsea football team today won the  Premier League for the first time since 2006, with an emphatic win over Wigan Athletic.
Revised: The UK's Chelsea football team today won the English Premier League for the first time since 2006, with an emphatic win over Wigan Athletic.
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Original:  The game started brightly for the north London club, going 2-0 up on 32 minutes, with goals from Gareth Bale and Luka Modric . Just before the break, Wade Elliott slotted one home for Clarets.
Revised:  The game started brightly for the north London club, going 2-0 up on 32 minutes, with goals from Gareth Bale and . Just before the break, Wade Elliott slotted one home for Clarets.
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Original: Onboard were six Finnish, four Estonian and two American passengers as well as two Finnish crew members.
Revised: On board were six Finnish, four Estonian and two American passengers as well as two Finnish crew members.
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Original:  Copterline, one of the largest helicopter airlines in Europe, has cancelled all upcoming flights today, but are continuing as scheduled tomorrow morning  & 
Revised:  Copterline, one of the largest helicopter airlines in Europe, has cancelled all upcoming flights today, but are continuing as scheduled tomorrow morning . & 
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Original:  Copterline, one of the largest helicopter airlines in Europe, has cancelled all upcoming flights today, but are continuing as scheduled tomorrow morning  & 
Revised:  Copterline, one of the largest helicopter airlines in Europe, has cancelled all upcoming flights today, but are continuing as scheduled tomorrow morning & timeline
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Original: The climber Tomaž Humar became trapped by a bad weather and avalanches in a ice-cave on 5 August at an approximate height of 5900 meters with no food left for the last few days.
Revised:  Humar became trapped by a bad weather and avalanches in a ice-cave on 5 August at an approximate height of 5900 meters with no food left for the last few days.
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Original: On Sunday, opened the for two days, allowing many people, who had been waiting since it closed two months ago following a terror attack in the , to cross the border with the Gaza strip in both directions.
Revised: On Sunday, opened the for two days, allowing many people, who had been waiting since it closed two months ago following a terror attack in the , to cross the border with the in both directions.
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Original: On October 24th , a car bomb detonated in northern Sinai, causing the death of 31 Egyptian security personnel and injuring over 30.
Revised: On October 24 , a car bomb detonated in northern Sinai, causing the death of 31 Egyptian security personnel and injuring over 30.
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Original:  Gaza citizens who had been stuck in Egypt and were unable to enter the Gaza Strip were relieved to return to their homes.
Revised:  Gaza citizens who had been stuck in Egypt as they were unable to enter the Gaza Strip were relieved to return to their homes.
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Original:  Gaza citizens who had been stuck in Egypt and were unable to enter the Gaza Strip were relieved to return to their homes.
Revised:  Gaza citizens who had been stuck in Egypt and were unable to enter the Gaza Strip , were able to return to their homes.
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