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Original: Photo of an elementary school in Evanston, Illinois.
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Original:  The device, which unnamed sources claim is called the BlackPad, will be launched by the fourth quarter of this year, according to The Wall Street Journal.
Revised:  The device, which unnamed sources claim is called the BlackPad, will be launched by the end of this year, according to The Wall Street Journal.
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Original:  If RIM uses the QNX operating system, the company's new Blackberry 6 opertaing system will be retired early.
Revised:  If RIM uses the QNX operating system, the company's new Blackberry 6 operating system will be retired early.
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Original: If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will have to compete against Apple Inc 's iPad.
Revised: If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will have to compete against Apple 's iPad.
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Original:  If the device is rolled out , it will compete with Apple Inc.
Revised:  If the device is released , it will compete with Apple Inc.
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Original:  If the device is rolled out , it will compete with Apple Inc.
Revised:  If the device is rolled out , it will compete with Apple 
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Original:  's iPad and also  Samsung's GalaxyTab , which runs on the Android operating system.
Revised:  's iPad and also with Samsung's GalaxyTab , which runs on the Android operating system.
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Original:  's iPad and also  Samsung's GalaxyTab , which runs on the Android operating system.
Revised:  's iPad and also Samsung's GalaxyTab which runs on the Android operating system.
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Original:  RIM is most famous for making their line of BlackBerry smartphones.
Revised:  RIM is best known for their line of BlackBerry smartphones.
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Original:  RIM is expected to capture just 11.7\% of the smartphone market in 2014, a plunge from the 17.5\% it currently holds, according to Gartner.
Revised:  RIM is expected to capture 11.7\% of the smartphone market in 2014, a plunge from the 17.5\% it currently holds, according to Gartner.
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Original:  Some people are optimistic about RIM's probable venture into tablet devices, such as Tim Bajarin of Creative Strategies, who said that "if you're a smartphone vendor today the natural way to continue to growing your business would be to introduce a tablet."
Revised:  Some people are optimistic about RIM's probable venture into tablet devices, such as Tim Bajarin of Creative Strategies, who said that "if you're a smartphone vendor today the natural way to continue to grow your business would be to introduce a tablet."
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Original:  Motorola has said that they will launch a iPad rival in early 2011, while Samsung and Dell have already released similar devices.
Revised:  Motorola has said that they will launch a rival to the iPad in early 2011, while Samsung and Dell have already released similar devices.
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Original:  Microsoft has also announced that they will make software that will rival Apple's tablet device
Revised:  Microsoft has also announced that they will develop software to rival Apple's tablet device
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Original:  If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will have to compete against Apple's iPad.
Revised:  If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will compete against Apple's iPad.
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Original:  If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will have to compete against Apple's iPad.
Revised:  If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will have to compete against Apple's w:iPad.
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Original:  Some people are optimistic about RIM's probable venture into tablet devices, such as Tim Bajarin of Creative Strategies, who said that "if you're a smartphone vendor today the natural way to continue to grow your business would be to introduce a tablet."
Revised:  Some people are optimistic about RIM's probable venture into tablet devices, such as Tim Bajarin of Creative Strategies, who said that "if you're a smartphone vendor today the natural way to continue to growing your business would be to introduce a tablet."
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Original: Image:IPad-02.jpg|If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will compete against Apple's w:iPad.
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Original: Image:IPad-02.jpg|If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will compete against Apple's w: iPad.
Revised: Image:IPad-02.jpg|If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will compete against Apple's iPad.
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Original: If RIM launches a new tablet device, it will compete against 's . Canadian technology company (RIM) is expected to unveil a new tablet device early next week at a developers conference.
Revised:  Canadian technology company (RIM) is expected to unveil a new tablet device early next week at a developers conference.
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Original: A researcher at the University of Oxford has found a saucy poem attributed to John Milton , the 17th-century poet who wrote Paradise Lost and other religious verse.
Revised: A researcher at the University of Oxford has found a saucy poem attributed to , the 17th-century poet who wrote Paradise Lost and other religious verse.
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Original: A researcher at the University of Oxford has found a saucy poem attributed to John Milton , the 17th-century poet who wrote Paradise Lost and other religious verse.
Revised: A researcher at the University of Oxford has found a saucy poem attributed to John Milton , the 17th-century poet who wrote and other religious verse.
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Original:  File:Radcliffe Camera, Oxford - Oct 2006.jpg|The Radcliffe Camera at the University of Oxford, part of the Bodleian Library, in which the poem was found The poem was found by Dr Jennifer Batt, who said that it "is so out of tune with the rest of his work, that if the attribution is correct, it would prompt a major revision of our ideas about Milton."
Revised:  The at the University of Oxford, part of the Bodleian Library, in which the poem was found The poem was found by Dr Jennifer Batt, who said that it "is so out of tune with the rest of his work, that if the attribution is correct, it would prompt a major revision of our ideas about Milton."
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Original:  She discovered the rude verse in the Harding Collection of poetry anthologies held by the Bodleian Library , the main university library at Oxford.
Revised:  She discovered the rude verse in the Harding Collection of poetry anthologies held by the , the main university library at Oxford.
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Original:  He followed it with Paradise Regained , depicting the temptations of Jesus in the wilderness.
Revised:  He followed it with , depicting the temptations of Jesus in the wilderness.
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Original:  She suggests that the culprit might have been Sir John Suckling , a poet who was a supporter of the monarchy, in contrast to the Republican Milton.
Revised:  She suggests that the culprit might have been , a poet who was a supporter of the monarchy, in contrast to the Republican Milton.
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Original:  I am pretty certain it is not.  
Revised:  I am pretty certain it is not. " 
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Original:  Anti-piracy mission EU Navfor said the septet were arrested by Spanish navy sailors after attacking Malta-registered cargo vessel Anny Petrakis  [  
Revised:  Anti-piracy mission EU Navfor said the septet were arrested by Spanish navy sailors after attacking Malta-registered cargo vessel Anny Petrakis . [ 
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Original:  Anti-piracy mission EU Navfor said the septet were arrested by Spanish navy sailors after attacking Malta-registered cargo vessel Anny Petrakis  [  
Revised:  Anti-piracy mission EU Navfor said the septet were arrested by Spanish navy sailors after attacking Malta-registered cargo vessel Anny Petrakis [had 
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Original: A judge in Mombasa, Kenya has sentenced a group of seven Somali pirates to five years each in jail, according to a statement by the European Union.
Revised: A court in Mombasa, Kenya has sentenced a group of seven Somali pirates to five years each in jail, according to a statement by the European Union.
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Original:  Presiding magistrate Timothy Ole Tanchut told the men he "...
Revised:  Presiding over the conviction and sentencing, Timothy Ole Tanchut told the men he "...
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Original: [had] have concrete proof that you attacked a vessel in the high seas and I order you to serve five years in prison," ruling that they will be deported to Somalia after serving their sentences.
Revised: [had] concrete proof that you attacked a vessel in the high seas and I order you to serve five years in prison," ruling that they will be deported to Somalia after serving their sentences.
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Original:  around 100 more await trial in custody.
Revised:  around 100 suspects await trial in custody.
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Original:   United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime, the European Union, Australia and Canada have all chipped in with donations to fund the court
Revised:  The United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime, the European Union, Australia and Canada have all chipped in with donations to fund the court
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Original: A documentary set to be shown on October 1 , 2010 in Australia about the life and times of the soon to be cannonised Mary MacKillop -  the first Australian to be made a saint , suggests that nuns including MacKillop of the Sisterhood of St Joseph of the Sacred Heart in South Australia were condemned and even excommunicated by high ranking priests for informing the authorities of the apparent paedophilic acts of Father Patrick Keating at a local public school in Kapunda, South Australia.
Revised: A documentary set to be shown on October 1 , 2010 in Australia about the life and times of the soon to be cannonised Mary MacKillop - who will be the first Australian to be made a saint , suggests that nuns including MacKillop of the Sisterhood of St Joseph of the Sacred Heart in South Australia were condemned and even excommunicated by high ranking priests for informing the authorities of the apparent paedophilic acts of Father Patrick Keating at a local public school in Kapunda, South Australia.
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Original: A documentary set to be shown on October 1 , 2010 in Australia about the life and times of the soon to be cannonised Mary MacKillop -  the first Australian to be made a saint , suggests that nuns including MacKillop of the Sisterhood of St Joseph of the Sacred Heart in South Australia were condemned and even excommunicated by high ranking priests for informing the authorities of the apparent paedophilic acts of Father Patrick Keating at a local public school in Kapunda, South Australia.
Revised: A documentary set to be shown on October 1 , 2010 in Australia about the life and times of the soon to be cannonised Mary MacKillop - the first Australian to be made a saint - suggests that nuns including MacKillop of the Sisterhood of St Joseph of the Sacred Heart in South Australia were condemned and even excommunicated by high ranking priests for informing the authorities of the apparent paedophilic acts of Father Patrick Keating at a local public school in Kapunda, South Australia.
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Original:  Bishop Shiel , renounced the excommunications on his deathbed , five months later.
Revised:  Bishop Shiel renounced the excommunications on his deathbed , five months later.
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Original:  Bishop Shiel , renounced the excommunications on his deathbed , five months later.
Revised:  Bishop Shiel , renounced the excommunications on his deathbed five months later.
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Original:  The alledged paedophile priest, Father Keating, was deported back to Ireland, where he continued in fatherhood in the Catholic Church.
Revised:  The alledged paedophile priest, Father Keating, returned to Ireland, where he continued in fatherhood in the Catholic Church.
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Original: A documentary set to be shown on October 10, 2010 in Australia about the life and times of the soon to be cannonised Mary MacKillop -
Revised: A documentary set to be shown on October 10, 2010 in Australia about the life and times of the soon to be canonised Mary MacKillop -
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Original:  "She submitted to a farcical ceremony where the bishop was, I'm not sure you should use this word, gaga, but he had lost it and he was being manipulated by malicious priests," Father Paul Gardiner, a prominent figure in the cannonisation of Mary McKillop, claims.
Revised:  "She submitted to a farcical ceremony where the bishop was, I'm not sure you should use this word, gaga, but he had lost it and he was being manipulated by malicious priests," Father Paul Gardiner, a prominent figure in the canonisation of Mary McKillop, claims.
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Original: Australian New South Wales Liberal party leader John Brogden was found to have attempted suicide in his electoral office late that night , after he resigned due to heavy media criticism about inappropriate comments he had made against the previous Government premier Bob Carr's wife, Helena Carr , calling her a "mail-order bride".
Revised: Australian New South Wales Liberal Party leader John Brogden was found to have attempted suicide in his electoral office late that night , after he resigned due to heavy media criticism about inappropriate comments he had made against the previous Government premier Bob Carr's wife, Helena Carr , calling her a "mail-order bride".
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Original: Australian New South Wales Liberal party leader John Brogden was found to have attempted suicide in his electoral office late that night , after he resigned due to heavy media criticism about inappropriate comments he had made against the previous Government premier Bob Carr's wife, Helena Carr , calling her a "mail-order bride".
Revised: Australian New South Wales Liberal party leader John Brogden was found to have attempted suicide in his electoral office late that night , after he resigned due to heavy media criticism ofinappropriate comments he had made against the previous Government premier Bob Carr's wife, Helena Carr , calling her a "mail-order bride".
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Original: Australian New South Wales Liberal party leader John Brogden was found to have attempted suicide in his electoral office late that night , after he resigned due to heavy media criticism about inappropriate comments he had made against the previous Government premier Bob Carr's wife, Helena Carr , calling her a "mail-order bride".
Revised: Australian New South Wales Liberal party leader John Brogden was found to have attempted suicide in his electoral office late that night , after he resigned due to heavy media criticism about inappropriate comments he had made against the previous Government premier Bob Carr's wife, Helena Carr . Mr Brogden called her a "mail-order bride".
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Original:  He was rushed to a North Shore hospital where his attempt was unsuccessful . Carr, who originally had stated he did not accept Brogden's earlier apology, later capitulated, stating that his wife had asked to forgive him.
Revised:  He was rushed to a North Shore hospital . Carr, who originally had stated he did not accept Brogden's earlier apology, later capitulated, stating that his wife had asked to forgive him.
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Original:  It was also argued whether The Daily Telegraph newspaper, who was aiming to release new allegations of sexual harassment , after Brogden had resigned, played any part in the suicide attempt.
Revised:  It was also argued whether The Daily Telegraph newspaper, which was aiming to release new allegations of sexual harassment , after Brogden had resigned, played any part in the suicide attempt.
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Original:  It was also argued whether The Daily Telegraph newspaper, who was aiming to release new allegations of sexual harassment , after Brogden had resigned, played any part in the suicide attempt.
Revised:  It was also argued whether The Daily Telegraph newspaper, who was aiming to release new allegations of sexual harassment after Brogden had resigned, played any part in the suicide attempt.
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Original: Australian New South Wales Liberal Party leader John Brogden was found to have attempted suicide in his electoral office late on the night of August 30, after he resigned due to heavy media criticism ofinappropriate comments he had made against the previous Government premier Bob Carr's wife, Helena Carr.
Revised: Australian New South Wales Liberal Party leader John Brogden was found to have attempted suicide in his electoral office late on the night of August 30, after he resigned due to heavy media criticism of comments he had made against the previous Government premier Bob Carr's wife, Helena Carr.
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Original: ]] Anonymous tip-off
Revised: ]] 'Unknown reliability”
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Original: ]] 'Unknown reliability ”
Revised: ]] 'Unknown reliability '
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Original:   ]  The Pakistan International Airlines jetliner, which was carrying 273 people according to an airport spokesperson, was flying Flight 782, which travels from Toronto to Karachi, when it was diverted to Stockholm-Arlanda Airport in Stockholm after Canadian officials were informed that a passenger had explosives on his person.
Revised:  they] The Pakistan International Airlines jetliner, which was carrying 273 people according to an airport spokesperson, was flying Flight 782, which travels from Toronto to Karachi, when it was diverted to Stockholm-Arlanda Airport in Stockholm after Canadian officials were informed that a passenger had explosives on his person.
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Original: ]] 'Unknown reliability'
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Original:   The Royal Canadian Mounted Police, however, announced that the even may have been a "terrorism hoax," and said it was investigating.
Revised:  The Royal Canadian Mounted Police, however, announced that the call may have been a "terrorism hoax," and said it was investigating.
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Original:  They couldn't find any crime done, therefore [they] decided to release the man and he's free to go where he wants."  ]   Anonymous tip-off A police spokesperson said that two calls were recieved from a payphone in Canada, but no explosives were found on the man or in the aircraft, which was searched by a bomb squad.
Revised:  They couldn't find any crime done, therefore [they] decided to release the man and he's free to go where he wants." the] Anonymous tip-off A police spokesperson said that two calls were recieved from a payphone in Canada, but no explosives were found on the man or in the aircraft, which was searched by a bomb squad.
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Original:  They couldn't find any crime done, therefore [they] decided to release the man and he's free to go where he wants."  ]   Anonymous tip-off A police spokesperson said that two calls were recieved from a payphone in Canada, but no explosives were found on the man or in the aircraft, which was searched by a bomb squad.
Revised:  They couldn't find any crime done, therefore [they] decided to release the man and he's free to go where he wants." ] moment". Anonymous tip-off A police spokesperson said that two calls were recieved from a payphone in Canada, but no explosives were found on the man or in the aircraft, which was searched by a bomb squad.
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Original:  Suspect While it is not known if the man has a criminal record, it has been reported that he is not on any international no-fly lists, and no concerns were raised when he went through airport security in Canada.
Revised:  While it is not known if the man has a criminal record, it has been reported that he is not on any international no-fly lists, and no concerns were raised when he went through airport security in Canada.
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Original: Authorities have said that an anonymous  call warning of a potential terrorist threat aboard an aircraft may have been a hoax call.
Revised: Authorities have said that an anonymous phone call warning of a potential terrorist threat aboard an aircraft may have been a hoax call.
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Original:  The stars arrival is also sepculated to help England's bid for the 2018 World Cu 
Revised:  The stars arrival is also sepculated to help England's bid for the 2018 World Cup. 
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Original:  Upon his arrival their was a numerous ammount of police on scene aswell as Beckham's own personal security tea 
Revised:  Upon his arrival their was a numerous ammount of police on scene aswell as Beckham's own personal security team. 
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Original:  The stars arrival is also sepculated to help England's bid for the 2018 World Cup.
Revised:  The stars arrival is also speculated to help England's bid for the 2018 World Cup.
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Original:  Trinidadian footballer Dwight York is reported to have been upset with the choice of Beckham over himself or cricketing legend Brian Lara.
Revised:  Trinidadian footballer Dwight Yorke is reported to have been upset with the choice of Beckham over himself or cricketing legend Brian Lara.
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Original: Beckham's saftey has come into question while he is visiting the island.
Revised: Beckham's safety has come into question while he is visiting the island.
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Original:  Beckham, who is reported to have a 125m fortune  could be a high target for a ransom kidnap.
Revised:  Beckham, who is reported to have a 125m fortune , could be a high target for a ransom kidnap.
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Original:  Upon his arrival their was a numerous ammount of police on scene aswell as Beckham's own personal security team.
Revised:  Upon his arrival , there were a numerous amount of police on scene aswell as Beckham's own personal security team.
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Original:  Upon his arrival their was a numerous ammount of police on scene aswell as Beckham's own personal security team.
Revised:  Upon his arrival their was a numerous ammount of police on scene as well as Beckham's own personal security team.
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Original:  The football festival he will host on Monday has gained critism from officals.
Revised:  The football festival he will host on Monday has gained criticism from officals.
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Original:  The host of the festival is the Marvin Lee Stadium , Lee was the captain of the Trinidad and Tobago national football team and died during a match in 2003 when he collided with Landon Donovan, a former team mate of Beckham.
Revised:  The host of the festival is the Marvin Lee Stadium ; Lee was the captain of the Trinidad and Tobago national football team and died during a match in 2003 when he collided with Landon Donovan, a former team mate of Beckham.
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Original:  The Trinidad Star newspaper said “ If we are talking about inspiring youths, then why do we have to turn to Beckham when we already have someone from here who has achieved everything in the game.
Revised:  The Trinidad Star newspaper said " If we are talking about inspiring youths, then why do we have to turn to Beckham when we already have someone from here who has achieved everything in the game.
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Original: Delta  flight 4951 made a safe emergency landing yesterday at JFK International Airport in New York City yesterday after the  right landing gear failed.
Revised: Delta Airlines flight 4951 made a safe emergency landing yesterday at JFK International Airport in New York City yesterday after the right landing gear failed.
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Original: Delta  flight 4951 made a safe emergency landing yesterday at JFK International Airport in New York City yesterday after the  right landing gear failed.
Revised: Delta flight 4951 made a safe emergency landing at JFK International Airport in New York City yesterday after the right landing gear failed.
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