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Original: Japanese commissioner, Mr Minoru Morimoto, praised the winning vote and said the declaration "added weight to Japan ’ s proposal to normalize the IWC and bring it back to its original function of managing and regulating sustainable commercial whaling."
Revised: Japanese commissioner, Mr Minoru Morimoto, praised the winning vote and said the declaration "added weight to Japan ' s proposal to normalize the IWC and bring it back to its original function of managing and regulating sustainable commercial whaling."
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Original: The circumstances of the shooting  at the roadblock is a matter of dispute between Italy and the United States.
Revised: The circumstances of the shooting , at the roadblock is a matter of dispute between Italy and the United States.
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Original: The circumstances of the shooting  at the roadblock is a matter of dispute between Italy and the United States.
Revised: The circumstances of the shooting at the roadblock , are a matter of dispute between Italy and the United States.
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Original:  The U.S. military claimes that the car was approaching the checkpoint at high speed, when the troops attempted to signal the car with light signals, aiming a green laser at the windshield and warning shots.
Revised:  The U.S. military claims that the car was approaching the checkpoint at high speed, when the troops attempted to signal the car with light signals, aiming a green laser at the windshield and warning shots.
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Original: Italian prosecutors have asked a judge to indict a United States solider for fatally shooting the Italian intelligence officer Nicola Calipari at a roadblock in Iraq a year ago.
Revised: Italian prosecutors have asked a judge to indict a United States soldier for fatally shooting the Italian intelligence officer Nicola Calipari at a roadblock in Iraq a year ago.
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Original:  Calipari died just after freeing the Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena , as he was escorting her to the Baghdad airport.
Revised:  The shooting occured when Calipari was escorting the Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena , as he was escorting her to the Baghdad airport.
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Original:  Calipari died just after freeing the Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena , as he was escorting her to the Baghdad airport.
Revised:  Calipari died just after freeing the Italian journalist Giuliana Sgrena on her way to Baghdad airport.
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Original:  When the car came under fire by U.S. soldiers at a roadblock he used his body as a human shield for Sgrena, who was only lightly wounded in the incident.
Revised:  When their car came under fire by U.S. soldiers at a roadblock he used his body as a human shield for Sgrena, who was only lightly wounded in the incident.
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Original:  The circumstances of the shooting , at the roadblock, are a matter of dispute between Italy and the United States.
Revised:  The circumstances of the shooting are a matter of dispute between Italy and the United States.
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Original:  Moreover they allege that a proper inquire in the case was impossible since the vehicle was removed and army logs destroyed shortly after the incident.
Revised:  Moreover they allege that a proper inquiry into the case was impossible since the vehicle was removed and army logs destroyed shortly after the incident.
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Original:  Italian prosecuters are arguing that the shooting was a "political murder" as Calipari was a civil cervant and the shooting damaged Italy's interests.
Revised:  Italian prosecuters are arguing that the shooting was a "political murder" as Calipari was a civil servant and the shooting damaged Italy's interests.
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Original:  When their car came under fire by U.S. soldiers at a roadblock he used his body as a human shield for Sgrena, who was only lightly wounded in the incident.
Revised:  When their car came under fire from U.S. soldiers at a roadblock he used his body as a human shield for Sgrena, who was only lightly wounded in the incident.
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Original: Nicola Calipari was fatally shot by U.S. troops at a checkpoint in Iraq in 2005 Italian prosecutors have asked a judge to indict a United States soldier for fatally shooting the Italian intelligence officer Nicola Calipari at a roadblock in Iraq a year ago.
Revised: Nicola Calipari was fatally shot by U.S. troops at a checkpoint in Iraq in 2005 Italian prosecutors have asked a judge to indict a United States soldier for fatally shooting Italian intelligence officer Nicola Calipari at a roadblock in Iraq a year ago.
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Original:  Moreover  they allege that a proper inquiry into the case was impossible since the vehicle was removed and army logs destroyed shortly after the incident.
Revised:  Moreover , they allege that a proper inquiry into the case was impossible since the vehicle was removed and army logs destroyed shortly after the incident.
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Original: In the first period crosses and corner kicks met heads in the Tunisian box but the none of the succession of different foreheads found the target.
Revised: In the first period crosses and corner kicks met heads in the Tunisian box but none of the succession of different foreheads found the target.
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Original:  On 71 minutes the floodgates opened like the storm clouds had in the Gottlieb Daimler Stadium .
Revised:  On 71 minutes the floodgates opened like the storm clouds had in the Gottlieb Daimler Stadion .
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Original:  He denied that there were immediate plans to adopt Megan's Law, "What's important is that Gerry Sutcliffe goes to the US and looks at how they do things there.
Revised:  The spokesman denied that there were immediate plans to adopt Megan's Law, "What's important is that Gerry Sutcliffe goes to the US and looks at how they do things there.
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Original:  220px |File photo of a unicycle.
Revised:  200px |File photo of a unicycle.
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Original: Police in (US) arrested a man on Wednesday for riding his while nude.
Revised: Police in , , arrested a man on Wednesday for riding his while nude.
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Original:  His father also told media that Mr. Farley often has trouble distinguishing proper versus improper behavior, due to his illness . 120px|File photo of a unicycle .
Revised:  His father also told media that Mr. Farley often has trouble distinguishing proper versus improper behavior, due to his illness .
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Original: Police in , , arrested a man on Wednesday for riding his while nude.
Revised: Police in , , arrested a man on Wednesday for riding a while nude.
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Original:  The man's father reportedly told a local news source that Mr. Farley suffers from a mental illness, and refuses to take medication or participate in therapy.
Revised:  The man's father said Mr. Farley suffers from a mental illness, and refuses to take medication or participate in therapy.
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Original:  His father also told media that Mr. Farley often has trouble distinguishing proper versus improper behavior, due to his illness.
Revised:  He also said Mr. Farley often has trouble distinguishing proper versus improper behavior, due to his illness.
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Original: Police in , , arrested a man on Wednesday for riding a while nude.
Revised: Police in , arrested a man on Wednesday for riding a while nude.
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Original:  The city's chief of police told sources that the man, Joseph Glynn Farley, 45, of Clear Lake , Texas had been falling off his unicycle repeatedly while riding across a bridge.
Revised:  The city's chief of police told sources that the man, Joseph Glynn Farley, 45, of , Texas had been falling off his unicycle repeatedly while riding across a bridge.
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Original:  A popular tourist destination, the Kemah Boardwalk is located about 20 miles from downtown Houston .
Revised:  A popular tourist destination, the Kemah Boardwalk is located about 20 miles from downtown .
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Original:  Iran  suspended such enrichment , with Khatmi saying that enrichment is "our clear right" but that Iran had suspended it only "to show our goodwill".
Revised:  Iran claims to have suspended such enrichment , with Khatmi saying that enrichment is "our clear right" but that Iran had suspended it only "to show our goodwill".
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Original:  Iran  suspended such enrichment , with Khatmi saying that enrichment is "our clear right" but that Iran had suspended it only "to show our goodwill".
Revised:  Iran suspended such enrichment - President Khatmi said that enrichment is "our clear right" but that Iran had suspended it only "to show our goodwill".
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Original: Iranian President Mohammad Khatami has stated that his country will never give up its nuclear development process.
Revised: Iranian President Mohammad Khatami said today that his country will never give up its nuclear development process.
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Original:  Talking to foreign ambassadors in Tehran, he said : "We give our guarantee that we will not produce nuclear weapons because we're against them and do not believe they are a source of power, but we will not give up peaceful nuclear technology."
Revised:  Talking to foreign ambassadors in Tehran, he said , "We give our guarantee that we will not produce nuclear weapons because we're against them and do not believe they are a source of power, but we will not give up peaceful nuclear technology."
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Original:  Khatami also denounced  "the slanders of the American rulers against the Iranian nation and the establishment", saying they were aimed at "putting a cover on the failures of the extremist US policy".
Revised:  Khatami also denounced , "the slanders of the American rulers against the Iranian nation and the establishment", saying they were aimed at "putting a cover on the failures of the extremist US policy".
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Original:  She accuses Japan of influencing  some member nations of the Pacific Island Forum voting at the International Whaling Commission by supplying vast amounts of aid to certain small pacific nations.
Revised:  She accuses Japan of influencing the voting of some member nations of the Pacific Island Forum voting at the International Whaling Commission by supplying vast amounts of aid to certain small pacific nations.
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Original:  She accuses Japan of influencing  some member nations of the Pacific Island Forum voting at the International Whaling Commission by supplying vast amounts of aid to certain small pacific nations.
Revised:  She accuses Japan of influencing some member nations of the Pacific Island Forum at the International Whaling Commission by supplying vast amounts of aid to certain small pacific nations.
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Original:  She accuses Japan of influencing the voting of some member nations of the Pacific Island Forum at the International Whaling Commission by supplying vast amounts of aid to certain small pacific nations.
Revised:  She accuses Japan of influencing the voting of some member nations of the at the International Whaling Commission by supplying vast amounts of aid to certain small pacific nations.
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Original: The nicknames 'Blair Force One' and 'Blair Force Two' have already begin to stick.
Revised: The nicknames 'Blair Force One' and 'Blair Force Two' have already begun to stick.
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Original: Apple are planning to sell full-length feature films for download via the online iTunes store.
Revised: Apple is planning to sell full-length feature films for download via the online iTunes store.
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Original:  Apple Computer is planning to sell full-length feature films for download via the online iTunes Music Store.
Revised: Picture of the iTunes Music Store. Apple Computer is planning to sell full-length feature films for download via the online iTunes Music Store.
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Original: Bold text Shashi Tharoor starts campaign Hyderabad, June 20, 2006 The Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the United Nations, has pitched himself to the centre of the action, as he won India's blessing for his nomination to the post of Secretary General of the United Nations.
Revised:  Hyderabad, June 20, 2006 The Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the United Nations, has pitched himself to the centre of the action, as he won India's blessing for his nomination to the post of Secretary General of the United Nations.
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Original: Bold text Shashi Tharoor starts campaign Hyderabad, June 20, 2006 The Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the United Nations, has pitched himself to the centre of the action, as he won India's blessing for his nomination to the post of Secretary General of the United Nations.
Revised: Bold text Shashi Tharoor starts campaign The Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the United Nations, has pitched himself to the centre of the action, as he won India's blessing for his nomination to the post of Secretary General of the United Nations.
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Original:  However, it remains to be seen if these threats are translated into actio
Revised:  However, it remains to be seen if these threats are translated into action
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Original: The Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the United Nations, has pitched himself to the centre of the action, as he won India's blessing for his nomination to the post of  Secretary General of the  United Nations.
Revised: the Indian government announced has its support for Shashi Tharoor candidature to the post of Secretary General of the United Nations.
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Original: The Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the United Nations, has pitched himself to the centre of the action, as he won India's blessing for his nomination to the post of  Secretary General of the  United Nations.
Revised: The Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the United Nations, has pitched himself to the centre of the action, as he won India's blessing for his nomination to the post of the Secretary General of the United Nations.
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Original: The Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the United Nations, has pitched himself to the centre of the action, as he won India's blessing for his nomination to the post of  Secretary General of the  United Nations.
Revised: The Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the United Nations, has pitched himself to the centre of the action, as he won India's blessing for his nomination to the post of Secretary General of the w: United Nations.
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Original:  It is generally understood that Mr. Tharoor has the blessings of the incumbent Mr. Kofi Annan, with whom he has shared a long and fruitful working relationship.
Revised:  It is generally understood that Mr. Tharoor has the blessings of the incumbent Kofi Annan, with whom he has shared a long and fruitful working relationship.
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Original: The Indian government announced has its support for Shashi Tharoor candidature to the post of the Secretary General of the United Nations.
Revised: The Indian government has announced its support for Shashi Tharoor candidature to the post of the Secretary General of the United Nations.
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Original: The Indian government has announced its support for Shashi Tharoor  candidature to the post of the Secretary General of the United Nations.
Revised: The Indian government has announced its support for Shashi Tharoor 's candidature to the post of the Secretary General of the United Nations.
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Original:  Tharoor is a writer, jounralist and is currently the Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the UN.
Revised:  Tharoor is a writer, journalist and is currently the Under-Secretary-General for Communications and Public Information of the UN.
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Original:  Thanks Cybertar   
Revised:  Thanks “The ambition is to think about creating a single portal where people can search and see what stuff is out there under the same licence terms, from a range of different suppliers. The idea is that if we can create something compelling like that, we will attract other archives in the UK to contribute their material, so we’d be aggregating quite a large quantity.” 
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Original:  The programme began on New Year's Day in 1964 and has featured most of the top bands and artists ever since  
Revised:  The programme began on New Year's Day in 1964 and has featured most of the top bands and artists ever since . 
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Original: The BBC has confirmed that its famous Top of the Pops (TOTP) music programme is to be axed this summer, after Media Guardian broke the news.
Revised: The BBC has confirmed that its famous Top of the Pops music programme is to be axed this summer, after Media Guardian broke the news.
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Original:  The Controller of BBC Two, Roly Keating, has said "I've really enjoyed the last year that Top of the Pops has transmitted on BBC TWO and the team did a stirling job in revitalising the format for our audience, but we all recognise that the time has come to move on.
Revised:  The Controller of BBC Two, Roly Keating, said "I've really enjoyed the last year that Top of the Pops has transmitted on BBC TWO and the team did a stirling job in revitalising the format for our audience, but we all recognise that the time has come to move on.
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Original:  The BBC has confirmed that its famous Top of the Pops music programme is to be axed this summer, after Media Guardian broke the news.
Revised: right The BBC has confirmed that its famous Top of the Pops music programme is to be axed this summer, after Media Guardian broke the news.
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Original:  The Controller of BBC Two, Roly Keating, said "I've really enjoyed the last year that Top of the Pops has transmitted on BBC TWO and the team did a sterling job in revitalising the format for our audience, but we all recognise that the time has come to move on.
Revised:  The Controller of BBC Two, Roly Keating, said "I've really enjoyed the last year that Top of the Pops has transmitted on BBC Two and the team did a sterling job in revitalising the format for our audience, but we all recognise that the time has come to move on.
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Original: Trinidad and Tobago 's could manage just two shots to trouble Aldo Bobadilla in the Paraguay net.
Revised: Trinidad and Tobago could manage just two shots to trouble Aldo Bobadilla in the Paraguay net.
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Original: After 25 minutes Jack was a bystander when a Roberto Acuna's freekick was driven hard into the box.
Revised: After 25 minutes Jack was a bystander when Roberto Acuna's freekick was driven hard into the box.
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Original:  Before being known as Old Parliament House, the building was known as Provisional Parliament House - as it was built to be used for 50 years before a permanent building could be built    
Revised:  Before being known as Old Parliament House, the building was known as Provisional Parliament House - as it was built to be used for 50 years before a permanent building could be built . 
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Original:  Before being known as Old Parliament House, the building was known as Provisional Parliament House - as it was built to be used for 50 years before a permanent building could be built.
Revised:  Before being known as Old Parliament House, the building was known as Provisional Parliament House - as it was intended to be used for 50 years before a permanent building could be built.
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Original:  "The National Heritage List contains places that have played an important role in the development of our nation, such as Captain Cook’s landing place in New South Wales, Port Arthur in Tasmania and the Australian War Memorial in Canberra," said the Prime Minister  
Revised:  "The National Heritage List contains places that have played an important role in the development of our nation, such as Captain Cook’s landing place in New South Wales, Port Arthur in Tasmania and the Australian War Memorial in Canberra," said the Prime Minister . 
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Original:  Pagan rituals have taken place at this time every year for many centuries .
Revised:  Pagan rituals have taken place at this time every year for many centuries 
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Original:  A special car park was set up just for the event%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% thum
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Original:  A special car park was set up just for the event%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% thum
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Original:  Despite a night of torrential rain, spirits were high as the sun rose over the horizon - though the cloud did block out the dawn for much of the event.
Revised:  Despite a night of torrential rain, spirits were high as the sun rose over the horizon - though the CLOUD did block out the dawn for much of the event.
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Original:  Despite a night of torrential rain, spirits were high as the sun rose over the horizon - though the cloud did block out the dawn for much of the event.
Revised:  Despite a night of torrential rain, spirits were high as the sun rose over the horizon , though clouds blocked out the dawn for much of the event.
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Original:  The summer solstice is the longest day of the year in terms of time between dawn and dusk.
Revised:  The summer solstice is the longest day of the year , having the greatest length of time between dawn and dusk.
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Original:  Stonehenge is constructed in such a way that on the dawn of the solstice, the sun appears in the centre of one of the stone structures.
Revised:  Stonehenge is constructed so that on the dawn of the solstice, the sun appears in the centre of one of the stone structures.
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Original:  A number of Odeon cinemas nationwide have been using digital projection technology to screen the matches live with a high definiton (HD) picture.
Revised:  A number of Odeon cinemas nationwide have been using digital projection technology to screen the matches live with a high definition (HD) picture.
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Original:  HD broadcasts contain a greater level of detail than traditional tv broadcasts, meaning a sharper picture and better sound quality.
Revised:  HD broadcasts contain a greater level of detail than traditional TV broadcasts, meaning a sharper picture and better sound quality.
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Original:  Trailers before the match were substituted with a soundtrack of England athems , both the successful and not-so-successful ones, and the traditional movie treat of popcorn was replaced by trays of beer (in plastic cups) being brought in by the punters.
Revised:  Trailers before the match were replaced by a soundtrack of England athems , both the successful and not-so-successful ones, and the traditional movie treat of popcorn was replaced by trays of beer (in plastic cups) being brought in by the punters.
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Original:  Trailers before the match were substituted with a soundtrack of England athems , both the successful and not-so-successful ones, and the traditional movie treat of popcorn was replaced by trays of beer (in plastic cups) being brought in by the punters.
Revised:  Trailers before the match were substituted with a soundtrack of England anthems , both the successful and not-so-successful ones, and the traditional movie treat of popcorn was replaced by trays of beer (in plastic cups) being brought in by the punters.
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