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Original:  He also learned his sister had been raped and killed and his mother was dying in a British concentration camp . As Ronnie states , "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what ( Duquesne biographer ) Clement Wood called:
Revised:  Duquesne also discovered that his sister had been raped and killed and his mother was dying in a British concentration camp . As Ronnie states , "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what ( Duquesne biographer ) Clement Wood called:
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Original:  He also learned his sister had been raped and killed and his mother was dying in a British concentration camp . As Ronnie states , "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what ( Duquesne biographer ) Clement Wood called:
Revised:  He also learned his sister had been raped and murdered and his mother was dying in a British concentration camp . As Ronnie states , "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what ( Duquesne biographer ) Clement Wood called:
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Original:  He also learned his sister had been raped and killed and his mother was dying in a British concentration camp . As Ronnie states , "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what ( Duquesne biographer ) Clement Wood called:
Revised:  He also learned his sister had been raped and killed and his mother was dying in a British concentration camp . As Ronnie writes , "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what ( Duquesne biographer ) Clement Wood called:
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Original:  He also learned his sister had been raped and killed and his mother was dying in a British concentration camp . As Ronnie states , "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what ( Duquesne biographer ) Clement Wood called:
Revised:  He also learned his sister had been raped and killed and his mother was dying in a British concentration camp . As Ronnie states , "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what ( a biographer of Duquesne ) Clement Wood called:
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Original:  a walking living breathing searing killing destroying torch of hate . "  As a British officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage strategic British installations and to kill Kitchener.
Revised:  a walking living breathing searing killing destroying torch of hate " As a British officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage strategic British installations and to kill Kitchener.
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Original:  a walking living breathing searing killing destroying torch of hate . "  As a British officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage strategic British installations and to kill Kitchener.
Revised:  a walking living breathing searing killing destroying torch of hate . " . As a British officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage strategic British installations and to kill Kitchener.
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Original:  a walking living breathing searing killing destroying torch of hate . "  As a British officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage strategic British installations and to kill Kitchener.
Revised:  a walking living breathing searing killing destroying torch of hate . " As a British officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage strategic British installations and to assassinate Kitchener.
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Original:  He was wounded with a bullet through his right shoulder at the Siege of Ladysmith and promoted to the rank of captain in the artillery.
Revised:  He was wounded with a bullet through his right shoulder at the Siege of Ladysmith , but was promoted to the rank of captain in the artillery.
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Original:  Duquesne was captured by the British at the Battle of Colenso, but escaped in Durban.
Revised:  Duquesne was captured by the English at the Battle of Colenso, but escaped in Durban.
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Original:  When the British forces began their offensive against Pretoria, some of the gold from the central bank was sent by train to the small town of Machadodorp and then by road to the neutral harbor of Lourenço Marques in Portuguese East Africa (now Maputo, Mozambique) to be shipped to the Netherlands for the use of President Paul Kruger and other Boer exiles fleeing the Transvaal.
Revised:  During the English their invasion of Pretoria, some of the gold from the central bank was sent by train to the small town of Machadodorp and then by road to the neutral harbor of Lourenço Marques in Portuguese East Africa (now Maputo, Mozambique) to be shipped to the Netherlands for the use of President Paul Kruger and other Boer exiles fleeing the Transvaal.
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Original:  When the British forces began their offensive against Pretoria, some of the gold from the central bank was sent by train to the small town of Machadodorp and then by road to the neutral harbor of Lourenço Marques in Portuguese East Africa (now Maputo, Mozambique) to be shipped to the Netherlands for the use of President Paul Kruger and other Boer exiles fleeing the Transvaal.
Revised:  When the British forces began their offensive against Pretoria, some of the gold from the central bank was sent by train to the small town of Machadodorp , then by road to the neutral harbor of Lourenço Marques in Portuguese East Africa (now Maputo, Mozambique) to be shipped to the Netherlands for the use of President Paul Kruger and other Boer exiles fleeing the Transvaal.
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Original:  A final tally showed that about 1.5 million pounds (680,000 kilos) of gold bullion was removed from the South African Mint and National Bank between 29 May and 4 June 1900.
Revised:  A final tally showed about 1.5 million pounds (680,000 kilos) of gold bullion was removed from the South African Mint and National Bank between 29 May and 4 June 1900.
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Original:  Duquesne was in command of one of these large shipments of gold that was sent by wagon;
Revised:  Duquesne was in command of one of these large shipments of gold sent by wagon;
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Original:  When the struggleended , only two wounded Boers, Duquesne, and the tottys (native porters) remained alive.
Revised:  After the struggle , only two wounded Boers, Duquesne, and the tottys (native porters) remained alive.
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Original:  Duquesne ordered the tottys to hide the gold in the Caves of Leopards for safekeeping, to burn the wagons, and to kill the wounded.
Revised:  Duquesne ordered the tottys to hide the gold in the Caves of Leopards for safekeeping, to burn the wagons, and kill the wounded.
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Original:  Historian Art Ronnie writes in 1995 that the buried central bank gold, commonly referred to as "Kruger's Millions" is only a legend;
Revised:  Historian Art Ronnie writes in 1995 the buried central bank gold, commonly referred to as "Kruger's Millions" is only a legend;
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Original:  however, in more recent times there have been reports about discoveries in South Africa of the missing gold buried by Duquesne.
Revised:  however, recently, there are reports about discoveries in South Africa of the missing gold buried by Duquesne.
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Original:  For Duquesne, this would become the watershed event, as Ronnie states, "life would never again be the same for him ...
Revised:  For Duquesne, this would become the watershed event, as Ronnie states, "life would never be the same for him ...
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Original:  In a few months  he would be launched on a forty-year career as a professional spy and counterfeit hero – a man who would constantly reinvent himself to suit the needs of the moment."
Revised:  In a few months , he would be launched on a forty-year career as a professional spy and counterfeit hero – a man who would constantly reinvent himself to suit the needs of the moment."
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Original:  At the internment camp in Portugal, he charmed the daughter of one of the guards , who then helped him escape to Paris .
Revised:  At the internment camp in Portugal, he charmed the daughter of one of the guards ; she helped him escape to Paris .
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Original:  He then infiltrated the British army and was posted to wartime South Africa in 1901 as an officer.
Revised:  He infiltrated the British army and was posted to wartime South Africa in 1901 as an officer.
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Original:  He then infiltrated the British army and was posted to wartime South Africa in 1901 as an officer.
Revised:  He then infiltrated the British army , then was posted to wartime South Africa in 1901 as an officer.
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Original:  He then infiltrated the British army and was posted to wartime South Africa in 1901 as an officer.
Revised:  He then infiltrated the British army and was posted to South Africa in 1901 as an officer.
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Original:  During this period, he marched through Nylstroom, discovering that his parent's farm there to have been destroyed under Lord Kitchener's scorched earth policy.
Revised:  During this period, he marched through Nylstroom, discovering his parent's farm there to have been destroyed under Lord Kitchener's scorched earth policy.
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Original:  During this period, he marched through Nylstroom, discovering that his parent's farm there to have been destroyed under Lord Kitchener's scorched earth policy.
Revised:  During this period, he marched through Nylstroom, discovering that his parent's farm was destroyed under Lord Kitchener's scorched earth policy.
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Original:  Duquesne also discovered that his sister had been raped and murdered  and his mother was interned in the Nylstroom concentration camp , which was also operated as part of Kitchener's policy.
Revised:  Duquesne also discovered his sister was raped and murdered and his mother was interned in the Nylstroom concentration camp , which was also operated as part of Kitchener's policy.
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Original:  Duquesne also discovered that his sister had been raped and murdered  and his mother was interned in the Nylstroom concentration camp , which was also operated as part of Kitchener's policy.
Revised:  Duquesne also discovered that his sister had been raped and murdered and his mother was interned in the Nylstroom concentration camp operated as part of Kitchener's policy.
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Original:  As Ronnie writes, "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what (a biographer of Duquesne) Clement Wood called: a walking living breathing searing killing destroying torch of hate".
Revised:  Ronnie writes: "the fate of his country and of his family would breed in him an all-consuming hatred of England" and "would turn him into what (a biographer of Duquesne) Clement Wood called: a walking living breathing searing killing destroying torch of hate".
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Original:  As a British officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage strategic British installations and to assassinate Kitchener.
Revised:  As an English officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage strategic British installations and to assassinate Kitchener.
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Original:  As a British officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage strategic British installations and to assassinate Kitchener.
Revised:  As a British officer, Duquesne returned to Cape Town with secret plans to sabotage English installations and to assassinate Kitchener.
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Original:  He recruited 20 Boer men, but was betrayed by the wife of one.
Revised:  He recruited twenty Boer men, but was betrayed by the wife of one.
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Original:  He recruited 20 Boer men, but was betrayed by the wife of one.
Revised:  He recruited 20 Boer men, but the group were betrayed by the wife of one.
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Original:  On 11 October 1901, while attending a dinner for Sir Walter Hely-Hutchinson, the Cape Colony governor, he was arrested in full dress uniform for "conspiracy against the British government and on (the charge of) espionage."
Revised:  On 11 October 1901, while attending a dinner for Sir Walter Hely-Hutchinson, the Cape Colony governor, he was arrested in dress uniform for "conspiracy against the British government and on (the charge of) espionage."
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Original:  On 11 October 1901, while attending a dinner for Sir Walter Hely-Hutchinson, the Cape Colony governor, he was arrested in full dress uniform for "conspiracy against the British government and on (the charge of) espionage."
Revised:  On 11 October 1901, while attending a dinner for Sir Walter Hely-Hutchinson, the Cape Colony governor, he was arrested in full dress uniform for "conspiracy against the English and on (the charge of) espionage."
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Original:  He was court-martialled as a lieutenant in the British armyand sentenced to be shot along with his co-conspirators.
Revised:  He was court-martialled as a lieutenant in the English army, sentenced to be shot along with his co-conspirators.
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Original:  The other 20 members of his team were executed by firing squad the next day , but as a plea-bargain  his sentence was reduced to life in prison and in exchange Duquesne agreed to divulge secret Boer codes and to translate several Boer dispatches.
Revised:  The other twenty members of his team were executed by firing squad the next day , but as a plea-bargain his sentence was reduced to life in prison and in exchange Duquesne agreed to divulge secret Boer codes and to translate several Boer dispatches.
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Original:  The other 20 members of his team were executed by firing squad the next day , but as a plea-bargain  his sentence was reduced to life in prison and in exchange Duquesne agreed to divulge secret Boer codes and to translate several Boer dispatches.
Revised:  The other 20 members of his team were quickly executed , but as a plea-bargain his sentence was reduced to life in prison and in exchange Duquesne agreed to divulge secret Boer codes and to translate several Boer dispatches.
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Original:  The other 20 members of his team were executed by firing squad the next day , but as a plea-bargain  his sentence was reduced to life in prison and in exchange Duquesne agreed to divulge secret Boer codes and to translate several Boer dispatches.
Revised:  The other 20 members of his team were executed by firing squad the next day , but as a plea-bargain , his sentence was reduced to life in prison and in exchange Duquesne agreed to divulge secret Boer codes and to translate several Boer dispatches.
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Original:  The other 20 members of his team were executed by firing squad the next day , but as a plea-bargain  his sentence was reduced to life in prison and in exchange Duquesne agreed to divulge secret Boer codes and to translate several Boer dispatches.
Revised:  The other 20 members of his team were executed by firing squad the next day , but as a plea-bargain his sentence was reduced to life in prison . In exchange, Duquesne agreed to divulge secret Boer codes and to translate several Boer dispatches.
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Original:  According to Ronnie, "for the rest of his life he swore he never betrayed the Boer cause but actually created new codes that would mislead the British ." Duquesne was one of many Boer prisoners sent to the penal colony of Bermuda, an archipelago known for its frequent storm-wracked conditions, shark infested waters  and dangerous reefs.
Revised:  According to Ronnie, "for the rest of his life he swore he never betrayed the Boer cause but created new codes that would mislead the British ." Duquesne was one of many Boer prisoners sent to the penal colony of Bermuda, an archipelago known for its frequent storm-wracked conditions, shark infested waters and dangerous reefs.
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Original:  According to Ronnie, "for the rest of his life he swore he never betrayed the Boer cause but actually created new codes that would mislead the British ." Duquesne was one of many Boer prisoners sent to the penal colony of Bermuda, an archipelago known for its frequent storm-wracked conditions, shark infested waters  and dangerous reefs.
Revised:  According to Ronnie, "for the rest of his life he swore he never betrayed the Boer cause but actually created new codes that would mislead the British ." Duquesne was one of many Boer prisoners sent to the penal colony of Bermuda, an archipelago known for its frequent storm-wracked conditions, shark infested waters , and dangerous reefs.
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Original:  According to Ronnie, Bermuda was an "impossible, hopeless, and impregnable prison of pink beaches and sunlit waters from which no prisoner could escape – or so believed the British ."
Revised:  According to Ronnie, Bermuda was an "impossible, hopeless, and impregnable prison of pink beaches and sunlit waters from which no prisoner could escape – or so believed the English ."
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Original:  Duquesne had previously escaped from several other POW camps, and on the night of 25 June 1902, he slipped out of his tent, worked his way over a barbed-wire fence, swam 1.5 miles (2.4 km) past patrol boats and bright spot lights , and he used a distant lighthouse for navigation until he arrived ashore on the main island.
Revised:  Duquesne escaped from several other POW camps, and on the night of 25 June 1902, he slipped out of his tent, worked his way over a barbed-wire fence, swam 1.5 miles (2.4 km) past patrol boats and bright spot lights , and he used a distant lighthouse for navigation until he arrived ashore on the main island.
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Original:  Duquesne had previously escaped from several other POW camps, and on the night of 25 June 1902, he slipped out of his tent, worked his way over a barbed-wire fence, swam 1.5 miles (2.4 km) past patrol boats and bright spot lights , and he used a distant lighthouse for navigation until he arrived ashore on the main island.
Revised:  Duquesne had previously escaped from several other POW camps, and on the night of 25 June 1902, he slipped out of his tent, climbed a barbed-wire fence, swam 1.5 miles (2.4 km) past patrol boats and bright spot lights , and he used a distant lighthouse for navigation until he arrived ashore on the main island.
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Original:  Duquesne had previously escaped from several other POW camps, and on the night of 25 June 1902, he slipped out of his tent, worked his way over a barbed-wire fence, swam 1.5 miles (2.4 km) past patrol boats and bright spot lights , and he used a distant lighthouse for navigation until he arrived ashore on the main island.
Revised:  Duquesne had previously escaped from several other POW camps, and on the night of 25 June 1902, he slipped out of his tent, worked his way over a barbed-wire fence, swam 1.5 miles (2.4 km) past patrol boats and bright spot lights . He used a distant lighthouse for navigation until he arrived ashore on the main island.
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Original:  Duquesne had previously escaped from several other POW camps, and on the night of 25 June 1902, he slipped out of his tent, worked his way over a barbed-wire fence, swam 1.5 miles (2.4 km) past patrol boats and bright spot lights , and he used a distant lighthouse for navigation until he arrived ashore on the main island.
Revised:  Duquesne had previously escaped from several other POW camps, and on the night of 25 June 1902, he slipped out of his tent, worked his way over a barbed-wire fence, swam 1.5 miles (2.4 km) past patrol boats and bright spot lights , and he used a distant lighthouse for navigation until he arrived on the main island.
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Original:  From there he went to the home of Anna Maria Outerbridge, a leader of a Boer Relief Committee.
Revised:  He went to the home of Anna Maria Outerbridge, a leader of a Boer Relief Committee.
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Original:  George's where another Boer Relief Committee member, Captain W. E. Meyer, was to arrange for his transportation off the island.
Revised:  George's . Another Boer Relief Committee member, Captain W. E. Meyer, was to arrange for his transportation off the island.
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Original:  George's where another Boer Relief Committee member, Captain W. E. Meyer, was to arrange for his transportation off the island.
Revised:  George's where another Boer Relief Committee member, Captain W. E. Meyer, arranged for his transportation off the island.
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Original:  A weeklater, Duquesne stowed away on boat heading to Baltimore, Maryland.
Revised:  Within the week, Duquesne was a passenger on boat heading to Baltimore, Maryland.
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Original: In the United States upFritz Duquesne, 1913 upAlice Wortley Duquesne, 1913 Having escaped from Bermuda, Duquesne proceeded to New York City, where he found employment as a journalist for the New York Herald and other newspapers by writing adventure stories.
Revised: In the United States upFritz Duquesne, 1913 upAlice Wortley Duquesne, 1913 Having escaped from Bermuda, Duquesne proceeded to New York city. He found employment as a journalist for the New York Herald and other newspapers by writing adventure stories.
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Original:  The Second Boer War ended in 1902 with the Boers signing the Treaty of Vereeniging, but with his family dead and because of his war crimes , Duquesne never returned to South Africa.
Revised:  The Second Boer War ended in 1902 with the Boers signing the Treaty of Vereeniging, but with his family dead , Duquesne never returned to South Africa.
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Original:  While in New York  , he published a novel in the French newspaper Le Petit Bleu, and two other novels published in South Africa.
Revised:  While in New York city , he published a novel in the French newspaper Le Petit Bleu, and two other novels published in South Africa.
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Original:  In 1908, he was written up in Men of America as a travelling correspondent sent to locations such as Port Arthur (now the Chinese Lüshunkou District) to report on the Russo-Japanese War, Morocco to report on the Riff Rebellion, and to the Belgian Congo ( now the Democratic Republic of the Congo  ) to accompany Sir Arthur Jones on an expedition , but no corroborating evidence has been found .
Revised:  In 1908, he was written up in Men of America as a travelling correspondent sent to locations such as Port Arthur (now the Chinese Lüshunkou District) to report on the Russo-Japanese War, Morocco to report on the Riff Rebellion, and to the Belgian Congo ( currently known as ' Democratic Republic of the Congo ) to accompany Sir Arthur Jones on an expedition , but no corroborating evidence has been found .
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Original:  In 1908, he was written up in Men of America as a travelling correspondent sent to locations such as Port Arthur (now the Chinese Lüshunkou District) to report on the Russo-Japanese War, Morocco to report on the Riff Rebellion, and to the Belgian Congo ( now the Democratic Republic of the Congo  ) to accompany Sir Arthur Jones on an expedition , but no corroborating evidence has been found .
Revised:  In 1908, he was written up in Men of America as a travelling correspondent sent to locations such as Port Arthur (now the Chinese Lüshunkou District) to report on the Russo-Japanese War, Morocco to report on the Riff Rebellion, and to the Belgian Congo ( now the Democratic Republic of the Congo ' ) to accompany Sir Arthur Jones on an expedition , but no corroborating evidence has been found .
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