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Original:  Then Australian foreign minister Alexander Downer commented that  it seems a very light sentence frankly.
Revised:  Then Australian foreign minister Alexander Downer commented that " it seems a very light sentence frankly.
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Original:  As the plane approached the runway the Ground Proximity Warning System sounded fifteen times to inform the flight crew the jet was gong too fast for a safe landing.
Revised:  As the plane approached the runway the Ground Proximity Warning System sounded fifteen times to inform the flight crew the jet was going too fast for a safe landing.
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Original:  This, while many express shock and sadness over the crime.
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Original:  He was questioned by police on March 16th, just two days after Benefield's car was found at a church near her home, but he was released after 5 hours of questioning.
Revised:  He was questioned by police on March 16th, just two days after Benefield's car was found at a church near her home, but he was released after five hours of questioning.
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Original:  The fundraiser was held at a small grocery store in the neighboring town of Bethany , which borders the Louisiana-Texas state line.
Revised:  The fundraiser was held at a small grocery store in the neighboring town of , which borders the Louisiana-Texas state line.
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Original:  Webster, 25, was arrested early last week and charged with one count of murder and one count of felon in posession of a firearm.
Revised:  Webster, 25, was arrested early last week and charged with one count of murder and one count of felony possession of a firearm.
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Original:  Benefield's body was found in  . Upon hearing of the discovery, a family member of the victim posted to his Facebook page, "Struggling to know how someone could do such a horrific thing."
Revised:  Benefield's body was found in . Upon hearing of the discovery, a family member of the victim posted to his page, "Struggling to know how someone could do such a horrific thing."
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Original:  Webster is presently being held on 1 million bond in the Harrison County jail.
Revised:  Webster is presently being held on 1 million bond in the jail.
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Original:  He was questioned by police on March 16th , just two days after Benefield's car was found at a church near her home, but he was released after five hours of questioning.
Revised:  He was questioned by police on March 16 , just two days after Benefield's car was found at a church near her home, but he was released after five hours of questioning.
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Original:  Alicia Benefield, 19, of was allegedly killed by her former boyfriend, Rodris Webster.
Revised:  Alicia Benefield, 19, of was allegedly killed by her boyfriend, Rodris Webster.
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Original:  Alicia Benefield, 19, of was allegedly killed by her boyfriend, Rodris Webster.
Revised:  Alicia Benefield, 19, of was killed allegedly by her boyfriend, Rodris Webster.
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Original: Webster, 25, was arrested early last week and charged with one count of murder and one count of felony possession of a firearm.
Revised: Webster, 25, was arrested early last week and charged with one count of murder and one count of felon in possession of a firearm.
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Original:  He was questioned by police on March 16, just two days after Benefield's car was found at a church near her home, but he was released after five hours of questioning.
Revised:  Earlier, he was questioned by police on March 16, just two days after Benefield's car was found at a church near her home, but he was released after five hours of questioning.
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Original:  He was questioned by police on March 16, just two days after Benefield's car was found at a church near her home, but he was released after five hours of questioning.
Revised:  He was questioned by police on March 16, just two days after Benefield's car was found at a church near her home, but was released after five hours of questioning.
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Original: On Friday April 3, Krajniak cleaned his entire apartment with about five gallons of gasoline  wiping everything down with the soaked rags.
Revised: On Friday April 3, Krajniak cleaned his entire apartment with about five gallons of gasoline , wiping everything down with the soaked rags.
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Original: The careless smoking of cigarettes has been blamed for thousands of fire across the U.S..
Revised: The careless smoking of cigarettes has been blamed for thousands of fires across the U.S..
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Original:  Ernest Krajniak from Chilton, Wisconsin in the United States has been charged with arson after a lit cigarette ignited gasoline soaked rags and clothes, setting his apartment ablaze.
Revised:  Ernest Krajniak from Chilton, Wisconsin in the United States has been charged with arson after a lit cigarette ignited gasoline soaked clothes, setting his apartment ablaze.
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Original:  On Friday April 3, Krajniak, 47, cleaned his entire apartment with about five gallons of gasoline, wiping everything down with the soaked rags . After he was finished, he piled the soaked rags in the center of his bedroom, lit a cigarette and then threw the remaining contents into the pile of soaked rags , still lit.
Revised:  On Friday April 3, Krajniak, 47, cleaned his entire apartment with about five gallons of gasoline, wiping everything down with the soaked rags . After he was finished, he piled the soaked rags in the center of his bedroom, lit a cigarette and then threw the remaining contents into the pile , still lit.
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Original:  After he was finished, he piled the soaked clothes in the center of his bedroom, lit a cigarette and then threw the remaining contents into the pile , still lit .
Revised:  After he was finished, he piled the soaked clothes in the center of his bedroom, lit a cigarette and then threw what was left of the still lit cigarette, into the pile , still lit .
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Original:  After he was finished, he piled the soaked clothes in the center of his bedroom, lit a cigarette and then threw the remaining contents into the pile , still lit .
Revised:  After he was finished, he piled the soaked clothes in the center of his bedroom, lit a cigarette and then threw the remaining contents into the pile .
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Original:  The fire department later arrived to put out the blaze and his apartment was extensively damaged with smoke damage throughout the whole building . 11 other apartments were also damaged, leaving the occupants without a place to stay for at least a week.
Revised:  The fire department later arrived to put out the blaze and his apartment was extensively smoke damaged . 11 other apartments were also damaged, leaving the occupants without a place to stay for at least a week.
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Original:  The bodies were taken to Kandahar where they would then leave to Kabul before arriving at their home town . Hamid Karzai, President of Afghanistan dispatched aircraft to Pakistan to bring home the 46 victims , however poor weather grounded the planes, and they were driven back across the border.
Revised:  The bodies were taken to Kandahar then to Kabul then their home towns . Hamid Karzai, President of Afghanistan dispatched aircraft to Pakistan to bring home the 46 victims , however poor weather grounded the planes, and they were driven back across the border.
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Original:  The bodies were taken to Kandahar where they would then leave to Kabul before arriving at their home town . Hamid Karzai, President of Afghanistan dispatched aircraft to Pakistan to bring home the 46 victims , however poor weather grounded the planes, and they were driven back across the border.
Revised:  The bodies were taken to Kandahar where they would then leave to Kabul before arriving at their home town . Hamid Karzai, President of Afghanistan dispatched aircraft to Pakistan to bring home the 46 victims . Poor weather grounded the planes, and they were driven back across the border.
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Original:  The bodies were taken to Kandahar where they would then leave to Kabul before arriving at their home town . Hamid Karzai, President of Afghanistan dispatched aircraft to Pakistan to bring home the 46 victims , however poor weather grounded the planes, and they were driven back across the border.
Revised:  The bodies were taken to Kandahar where they would then leave to Kabul before arriving at their home town . Hamid Karzai, President of Afghanistan dispatched aircraft to Pakistan to bring home the 46 victims , however poor weather grounded the planes, and the bodies were driven back across the border.
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Original:  The locked truck packed with approximately 111 people was found by Pakistan police around south of Quetta.
Revised:  Pakistan police found a locked truck packed with approximately 111 people was found by Pakistan police around south of Quetta.
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Original:  45 other people were found unconscious and taken directly to the hospital , where two more passed away.
Revised:  45 other people were found unconscious and taken directly to the hospital . At hospital two more migrants passed away.
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Original:  They were all Afghans in the container and the container was going to Iran, When the condition of people inside the container deteriorated, the driver fled, leaving the container , "
Revised:  They were all Afghans in the container and the container was going to Iran, When the condition of people inside the container deteriorated, the driver fled, leaving the container . "
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Original: ]]  46 Afghan illegal immigrants who suffocated to death in a container truck Saturday near Quetta, Pakistan  returned home Tuesday.
Revised: ]] 46 Afghan illegal immigrants who suffocated to death in a container truck Saturday near Quetta, Pakistan , returned home Tuesday.
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Original: St. Paul, Minn. — With 351 additional ballots counted, Al Franken has increased his lead over former Minnesota Sen.
Revised:  With 351 additional ballots counted, Al Franken has increased his lead over former Minnesota Sen.
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Original:  The close margin — less that 0.0075 percent — triggered an automatic recount which resulted in Franken leading by 225 votes, the total ratified by the Minnesota Canvasing Board Jan. 5.
Revised:  The close margin — less that 0.0075 percent — triggered an automatic recount which resulted in Franken leading by 225 votes, the total ratified by the Minnesota Canvasing Board January 5.
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Original:  The Coleman campaign filed a motion Jan. 6 in court to block the certification of Franken's victory and prevent Franken from taking a seat in the United States Senate.
Revised:  The Coleman campaign filed a motion January 6 in court to block the certification of Franken's victory and prevent Franken from taking a seat in the United States Senate.
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Original:  The Minn. court can rule as soon as Wednesday and Coleman has ten days to appeal that ruling to the Minnesota Supreme Court.
Revised:  The Minninesota court can rule as soon as Wednesday and Coleman has ten days to appeal that ruling to the Minnesota Supreme Court.
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Original:  An election certificate requires both the signature of Ritchie and Gov. Tim Pawlenty.
Revised:  An election certificate requires both the signature of Ritchie and governor Tim Pawlenty.
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Original:  The close margin — less that 0.0075 percent — triggered an automatic recount which resulted in Franken leading by 225 votes, the total ratified by the Minnesota Canvasing Board January 5.
Revised:  The close margin — less than 0.0075 percent — triggered an automatic recount which resulted in Franken leading by 225 votes, the total ratified by the Minnesota Canvasing Board January 5.
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Original: The Minninesota court can rule as soon as Wednesday and Coleman has ten days to appeal that ruling to the Minnesota Supreme Court.
Revised: The Minnesota court can rule as soon as Wednesday and Coleman has ten days to appeal that ruling to the Minnesota Supreme Court.
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Original:  On March 31, a three-judge panel hearing the case ordered 400 additional ballots be counted .
Revised:  On March 31, a three-judge panel hearing the case ordered 400 additional ballots be considered for counting .
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Original:  The main earthquake, which occurred on Monday, registered at 6.3  
Revised:  The main earthquake, which occurred on Monday, registered at 6.3 . 
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Original: A strong aftershock earthquake, measured at a magnitude of 5.6, shook  Italy on Tuesday, almost two days after a severe, 6.3 magnitude tremor hit the country.
Revised: A aftershock with a magnitude of 5.6, shook Italy on Tuesday, almost two days after a severe, 6.3 magnitude tremor hit the country.
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Original: A strong aftershock earthquake, measured at a magnitude of 5.6, shook  Italy on Tuesday, almost two days after a severe, 6.3 magnitude tremor hit the country.
Revised: A strong aftershock earthquake, measured at a magnitude of 5.6, shook Italy on Tuesday, almost two days after a major 6.3 magnitude tremor hit the country.
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Original: A strong aftershock earthquake, measured at a magnitude of 5.6, shook  Italy on Tuesday, almost two days after a severe, 6.3 magnitude tremor hit the country.
Revised: A strong aftershock earthquake, measured at a magnitude of 5.6, shook Italy on Tuesday, almost two days after a severe, 6.3 quake hit the country.
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Original:  As a result of the aftershock , two apartment blocks collapsed in the city of L'Aquila, and slabs of masonry fell from other damaged buildings.
Revised:  The aftershock caused two apartment blocks collapsed in the city of L'Aquila, and slabs of masonry fell from other damaged buildings.
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Original:  As a result of the aftershock , two apartment blocks collapsed in the city of L'Aquila, and slabs of masonry fell from other damaged buildings.
Revised:  As a result of the aftershock , two apartment blocks to collapse in the city of L'Aquila, and slabs of masonry fell from other damaged buildings.
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Original:  Local media reports that an old church and many houses were also damaged as a result.
Revised:  Local media reported that an old church and many houses were also damaged as a result.
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Original:  Francessco Rocha, the head of the Italian Red Cross, estimated that twenty thousand people had lost their homes, and it may be many months before they can return to them.
Revised:  Francessco Rocha, the head of the Italian Red Cross, estimated that 20,000 people had lost their homes, and it may be many months before they can return to them.
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Original:  "Of these victims, 190 have been identified while other 17 remain unidentified, 15 people are missing and there are more than 1,000 injured, 100 of which are in serious conditions . "  "Civil protection men are working hard and for the next 48 hours rescuers will search for other survivors," the premier said . "More than 7,000 men are at work.
Revised:  "Of these victims, 190 have been identified while other 17 remain unidentified, 15 people are missing and there are more than 1,000 injured, 100 of which are in serious conditions , " "Civil protection men are working hard and for the next 48 hours rescuers will search for other survivors," the premier said . "More than 7,000 men are at work.
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Original: A aftershock with a magnitude of 5.6 , shook Central Italy on Tuesday, almost two days after a major 6.3 quake hit the country.
Revised: A aftershock with a magnitude of 5.6 shook Central Italy on Tuesday, almost two days after a major 6.3 quake hit the country.
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Original: "Civil protection men are working hard and for the next 48 hours rescuers will search for other survivors," added Berlusconi | . "More than 7,000 men are at work.
Revised: "Civil protection men are working hard and for the next 48 hours rescuers will search for other survivors," added Berlusconi . "More than 7,000 men are at work.
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Original: The 6.3  quake on April 6 is the deadliest quake to strike Italy since November 23, 1980.
Revised: The 6.3 -magnitude quake on April 6 is the deadliest quake to strike Italy since November 23, 1980.
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Original:  Although modern science seems to have disproved such a claim, the blessing is still recited and maintains much symbolic value in the Jewish faith   
Revised:  Although modern science seems to have disproved such a claim, the blessing is still recited and maintains much symbolic value in the Jewish faith . 
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Original: The sun or the shape of the sun must be seen in order to recite the "BirkatHachamah" between sunrise but no later than noon.
Revised: The sun or the shape of the sun must be seen in order to recite the "BirkatHachamah" after sunrise but no later than noon.
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Original:  Massada synagogue The blessing is intended to celebrate the positioning of the sun, stars, and planets in the exact formation in which they were created.
Revised:  The blessing is intended to celebrate the positioning of the sun, stars, and planets in the exact formation in which they were created.
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Original:  Friedman had worked for XAMOUNTOFTIME as a reviewer and media journalist for Fox News.
Revised:  Friedman had worked for several years as a reviewer and media journalist for Fox News.
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Original:  There's no wiggle room here.    
Revised:  There's no wiggle room here. " 
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Original:  While a press release from Fox says that the company and Friedman had "mutually agreed to part ways immediately", AFP and the New York Times report that he was fired   .
Revised:  While a press release from Fox says that the company and Friedman had "mutually agreed to part ways immediately", news articles report that he was fired .
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Original:  While a press release from Fox says that the company and Friedman had "mutually agreed to part ways immediately", AFP and the New York Times report that he was fired   .
Revised:  While a press release from Fox says that the company and Friedman had "mutually agreed to part ways immediately", AFP and the New York Times report that he was fired . .
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Original: " X-Men Origins: Wolverine " stars Hugh Jackman.
Revised:  X-Men Origins: Wolverine " stars Hugh Jackman.
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Original: " X-Men Origins: Wolverine " stars Hugh Jackman.
Revised: " X-Men Origins: Wolverine stars Hugh Jackman.
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Original:  If 20th Century Fox - and the FBI - are serious about nailing the perpetrator(s) of this leak, then Friedman must be fired immediately for downloading and reviewing stolen material.
Revised:  If 20th Century Fox — and the FBI - are serious about nailing the perpetrator(s) of this leak, then Friedman must be fired immediately for downloading and reviewing stolen material.
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Original:  If 20th Century Fox - and the FBI - are serious about nailing the perpetrator(s) of this leak, then Friedman must be fired immediately for downloading and reviewing stolen material.
Revised:  If 20th Century Fox - and the FBI — are serious about nailing the perpetrator(s) of this leak, then Friedman must be fired immediately for downloading and reviewing stolen material.
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Original:  There's no wiggle room here." " X Men Origins: Wolverine " , a prequel to the X-Men franchise of films, premieres in theaters in the United Kingdom on April 29, Australia and New Zealand on April 30, and the United States and Canada on May 1, 2009
Revised:  There's no wiggle room here." X Men Origins: Wolverine " , a prequel to the X-Men franchise of films, premieres in theaters in the United Kingdom on April 29, Australia and New Zealand on April 30, and the United States and Canada on May 1, 2009
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Original:  There's no wiggle room here." " X Men Origins: Wolverine " , a prequel to the X-Men franchise of films, premieres in theaters in the United Kingdom on April 29, Australia and New Zealand on April 30, and the United States and Canada on May 1, 2009
Revised:  There's no wiggle room here." " X Men Origins: Wolverine , a prequel to the X-Men franchise of films, premieres in theaters in the United Kingdom on April 29, Australia and New Zealand on April 30, and the United States and Canada on May 1, 2009
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Original:  "So now we're just trying to offer them whatever we can, food, but it's not working too good," Quinn said   
Revised:  "So now we're just trying to offer them whatever we can, food, but it's not working too good," Quinn said . 
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Original:  According to the authorities, the US destroyer the Bainbridge and six other vessels were dispatched to the scene.
Revised:  According to the authorities, a US destroyer and six other vessels were dispatched to the scene.
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Original:  According to Ken Quinn, the ship's second mate,  the four pirates were in the vessel's lifeboat with the captain, having sunk their boat after seizing the Alabama.
Revised:  Ken Quinn, the ship's second mate, the four pirates were in the vessel's lifeboat with the captain, having sunk their boat after seizing the Alabama.
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Original:  According to Ken Quinn, the ship's second mate,  the four pirates were in the vessel's lifeboat with the captain, having sunk their boat after seizing the Alabama.
Revised:  According to Ken Quinn, the ship's second mate, said that the four pirates were in the vessel's lifeboat with the captain, having sunk their boat after seizing the Alabama.
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Original:  According to Quinn, the crew did not have any weapons, but pirates had Kalashnikov assault rifles.
Revised:  According to Quinn, the crew did not have any weapons, but pirates were armed with Kalashnikov assault rifles.
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Original: The ship involved in the incident was the 17  000-tonne Maersk Alabama, which was headed to Mombasa, Kenya.
Revised: The ship involved in the incident was the 17 , 000-tonne Maersk Alabama, which was headed to Mombasa, Kenya.
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Original: The ship's crew had taken one of the pirates hostage in an attempt to swap him for the captain, but the deal went wrong . Piracy in the waters off the coast of Somalia and the Gulf of Eden is rife: this is the sixth ship to be seized by Somali pirates in the area in a week.
Revised: The ship's crew had taken one of the pirates hostage in an attempt to swap him for the captain, but the ploy failed to work . Piracy in the waters off the coast of Somalia and the Gulf of Eden is rife: this is the sixth ship to be seized by Somali pirates in the area in a week.
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Original:  The last time an American ship was attacked by  pirates was in 1804 , experts say
Revised:  The last time an American ship was attacked by pirates was in 1804 
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Original: The ship involved in the incident was the 17, 000-tonne Maersk Alabama, which was headed to Mombasa, Kenya.
Revised: The ship involved in the incident was the 17, 000-ton Maersk Alabama, which was headed to Mombasa, Kenya.
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Original:  It was attacked by Somali pirates about five hundred kilometres from Somalia's coast, according to the CEO and president of Maersk, John Reinhart.
Revised:  It was attacked by Somali pirates about five hundred kilometers from Somalia's coast, according to the CEO and president of Maersk, John Reinhart.
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Original: The ship involved in the incident was the 17, 000-ton Maersk Alabama, which was headed to Mombasa, Kenya.
Revised: The ship involved in the incident was the 17, 000-tonne Maersk Alabama, which was headed to Mombasa, Kenya.
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