wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  thrombosis of the veins of the arms (axillary and subclavian veins) Budd-Chiari syndrome (thrombosis of the hepatic vein) Thrombosis of the hepatic portal system  : Thrombosis of the superior mesenteric vein, which may cause mesenteric ischemia (insufficient blood flow to the intestine) Portal vein thrombosis Thrombosis of the splenic vein Renal vein thrombosis (thrombosis of the veins of the kidneys)
Revised:  thrombosis of the veins of the arms (axillary and subclavian veins) Budd-Chiari syndrome (thrombosis of the hepatic vein) Thrombosis of the hepatic portal system , also known as splanchnic venous thrombosis : Thrombosis of the superior mesenteric vein, which may cause mesenteric ischemia (insufficient blood flow to the intestine) Portal vein thrombosis Thrombosis of the splenic vein Renal vein thrombosis (thrombosis of the veins of the kidneys)
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Original:  thrombosis of the veins of the arms (axillary and subclavian veins) Budd-Chiari syndrome (thrombosis of the hepatic vein) Thrombosis of the hepatic portal system, also known as splanchnic venous thrombosis: Thrombosis of the superior mesenteric vein, which may cause mesenteric ischemia (insufficient blood flow to the intestine) Portal vein thrombosis Thrombosis of the splenic vein Renal vein thrombosis (thrombosis of the veins of the kidneys) 
Revised:  thrombosis of the veins of the arms (axillary and subclavian veins) Budd-Chiari syndrome (thrombosis of the hepatic vein) Thrombosis of the hepatic portal system, also known as splanchnic venous thrombosis: Thrombosis of the superior mesenteric vein, which may cause mesenteric ischemia (insufficient blood flow to the intestine) Portal vein thrombosis Thrombosis of the splenic vein Renal vein thrombosis (thrombosis of the veins of the kidneys) Ovarian vein thrombosis
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Original:  The most common form of venous thrombosis is a deep vein thrombosis (DVT), when a blood clot forms in the deep veins of the leg .
Revised:  A common form of venous thrombosis is a deep vein thrombosis (DVT), when a blood clot forms in the deep veins of the leg .
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Original:  The most common form of venous thrombosis is a deep vein thrombosis (DVT), when a blood clot forms in the deep veins of the leg .
Revised:  The most common form of venous thrombosis is deep vein thrombosis (DVT), when a blood clot forms in the deep veins of the leg .
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Original:  The most common form of venous thrombosis is a deep vein thrombosis (DVT), when a blood clot forms in the deep veins of the leg .
Revised:  The most common form of venous thrombosis is a deep vein thrombosis (DVT), when a blood clot forms in the deep veins .
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Original:  If the thrombus breaks off (it embolizes) and flows towards the lungs , it can become a pulmonary embolism (PE), a blood clot in the lungs.
Revised:  If the thrombus breaks off (it embolizes) and flows towards the lungs . It can become a pulmonary embolism (PE), a blood clot in the lungs.
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Original:  DVT and PE comprise venous thromboembolism (VTE).
Revised:  The conditions of DVT only, DVT with PE, and PE only are captured by the term venous thromboembolism (VTE).
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Original:  If the thrombus breaks off ( it embolizes) and flows towards the lungs .
Revised:  If a thrombus breaks off ( it embolizes) and flows towards the lungs .
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Original:  If the thrombus breaks off ( it embolizes) and flows towards the lungs .
Revised:  If the thrombus breaks off ( embolizes) and flows towards the lungs .
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Original: Venous thrombosis is thrombosis in a vein , caused by a thrombus (blood clot).
Revised: Venous thrombosis is blockage of a vein caused by a thrombus (blood clot).
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Original:  If a thrombus breaks off (embolizes) and flows towards the lungs , it can become a pulmonary embolism (PE), a blood clot in the lungs.
Revised:  If a thrombus breaks off (embolizes) and flows to the lungs to lodge there, it becomes a pulmonary embolism (PE), a blood clot in the lungs.
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Original:  The conditions of DVT only, DVT with PE, and PE only are captured by the term venous thromboembolism (VTE).
Revised:  The conditions of DVT only, DVT with PE, and PE only , are all captured by the term venous thromboembolism (VTE).
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Original:  The initial treatment for venous thromboembolism is typically with either low-molecular-weight heparin (LMWH) or unfractionated heparin, or increasingly with directly acting oral anticoagulants (DOAC).
Revised:  The initial treatment for VTE is typically either low-molecular-weight heparin (LMWH) or unfractionated heparin, or increasingly with directly acting oral anticoagulants (DOAC).
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Original:  The initial treatment for venous thromboembolism is typically with either low-molecular-weight heparin (LMWH) or unfractionated heparin, or increasingly with directly acting oral anticoagulants (DOAC).
Revised:  The initial treatment for venous thromboembolism is typically with either low-molecular-weight heparin (LMWH) or unfractionated heparin, or increasingly with direct acting oral anticoagulants (DOAC).
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Original:  When a blood clot breaks loose and travels in the blood, this is called a venous thromboembolism(VTE) .
Revised:  When a blood clot breaks loose and travels in the blood, this is called a thromboembolism .
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Original: Early life and education Alvi was born on 29 August 1949 in Karachi, Pakistan, to a Urdu-speaking Faqir Family.
Revised:  Alvi was born on 29 August 1949 in Karachi, Pakistan, to a Urdu-speaking Faqir Family.
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Original: Early life and education Alvi was born on 29 August 1949 in Karachi, Pakistan, to a Urdu-speaking Faqir Family.
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Original:  born 29 August 1949) is a Pakistani politician serving as the 13th and current president of Pakistan, in office since 9 September 2018.
Revised:  born 29 August 1949) is a Pakistani politician serving as the 13th and current President of Pakistan, in office since 9 September 2018.
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Original:  born 29 August 1949) is a Pakistani politician serving as the 13th and current President of Pakistan, in office since 9 September 2018.
Revised:  born 29 August 1949) is a Pakistani politician serving as the 13th and current president of Pakistan, in office since 9 September 2018.
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Original:  Through the course of the hour, Reagan mingles with various puppets (Cher, Jack Nicholson, Whoopi Goldberg, Ronald Reagan Sr., etc.), real-life people (Chuck Berry, Captain Lou Albano) and performing guests (Gloria Estefan, Eric Carmen, Rick Astley).
Revised:  Through the course of the hour, Reagan mingles with various puppets (Cher, Jack Nicholson, Whoopi Goldberg, Ronald Reagan Sr., etc.), real-life people (Chuck Berry, Lou Albano) and performing guests (Gloria Estefan, Eric Carmen, Rick Astley).
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Original:  Music Gloria Estefan and the Miami Sound Machine - "Anything for You", "Surrender" Rick Astley -  Never Gonna Give You Up  Eric Carmen - Hungry Eyes
Revised:  Music Gloria Estefan and the Miami Sound Machine - "Anything for You", "Surrender" Rick Astley - " Never Gonna Give You Up Eric Carmen - Hungry Eyes
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Original:  Music Gloria Estefan and the Miami Sound Machine - "Anything for You", "Surrender" Rick Astley -  Never Gonna Give You Up  Eric Carmen - Hungry Eyes
Revised:  Music Gloria Estefan and the Miami Sound Machine - "Anything for You", "Surrender" Rick Astley - Never Gonna Give You Up " Eric Carmen - Hungry Eyes
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Original:  Music Gloria Estefan and the Miami Sound Machine - "Anything for You", "Surrender" Rick Astley -  Never Gonna Give You Up  Eric Carmen - Hungry Eyes
Revised:  Music Gloria Estefan and the Miami Sound Machine - "Anything for You", "Surrender" Rick Astley - Never Gonna Give You Up Eric Carmen - "Hungry Eyes"
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Original:   Another popular variant uses the scratchcard metaphor.
Revised:  . Another popular variant uses the scratchcard metaphor.
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Original: A love coupon is a romantic way to say "I love you" .
Revised: A love coupon is a romantic way of expressing one's feelings for a partner in a relationship .
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Original:  It is a form of voluntary IOU or promissory note between people in love that contains a promise from one of the partners in a relationship to engage in a romantic activity at a time in the future.
Revised:  It is a form of voluntary IOU or promissory note between people in love that contains a promise from one of the partners in a relationship to engage in romantic activities at a time in the future.
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Original:  For example, Jones Soda Co. introduced in 2006 a Valentines Pack containing among others a book of "Love Coupons". 
Revised:  For example, Jones Soda Co. introduced in 2006 a Valentines Pack containing among others a book of "Love Coupons". Coupons are a great way to attract get and existing customers coming to your business. Here are 12 tips to use coupons to advertise your business.
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Original:  A love coupon is a romantic way of expressing one's feelings for a partner in a relationship.
Revised: coupon A love coupon is a romantic way of expressing one's feelings for a partner in a relationship.
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Original:  They are usually given as gifts on Valentine's Day, birthdays  or anniversary days.
Revised:  They are usually given as gifts on Valentine's Day, birthdays , or anniversary days.
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Original:  Usually  all tickets are winners, but like lottery cards  one has to find the winning item or combination.
Revised:  Usually , all tickets are winners, but like lottery cards one has to find the winning item or combination.
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Original:  Usually  all tickets are winners, but like lottery cards  one has to find the winning item or combination.
Revised:  Usually all tickets are winners, but like lottery cards , one has to find the winning item or combination.
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Original:  The winnings range from romance, love  and sex and the gift giver has to fulfill them.
Revised:  The winnings range from romance, love , and sex and the gift giver has to fulfill them.
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Original:  The winnings range from romance, love  and sex and the gift giver has to fulfill them.
Revised:  The winnings range from romance, love and sex and the gift-giver has to fulfill them.
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Original:  They can be sent by traditional mail, in digital format as email attachments, handed in person at the right moment  or placed as surprises in places where the receiver will stumble upon them.
Revised:  They can be sent by traditional mail, in digital format as email attachments, handed in person at the right moment , or placed as surprises in places where the receiver will stumble upon them.
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Original:  Love coupons can be bought in form of printed coupon books or can be downloaded and printed from various web sites . Some of these sites offer free customizable love coupons for download and print.
Revised:  Love coupons can be bought in form of printed coupon books or can be downloaded and printed from various websites . Some of these sites offer free customizable love coupons for download and print.
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Original:  Educational use A variant of the love coupon concept can be used by parents as an educational and relationship building tool.
Revised:  Educational use A variant of the love coupon concept can be used by parents as an educational and relationship-building tool.
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Original:  For example, Jones Soda Co. introduced in 2006 a Valentines Pack containing among others a book of "Love Coupons".
Revised:  For example, Jones Soda Co. introduced in 2006 a Valentine's Pack containing among others a book of "Love Coupons".
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Original:  Dr. Damas Ndumbaru is the new Tourism Minister of Tanzania.
Revised:  Dr. Damas Ndumbaro is the new Tourism Minister of Tanzania.
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Original: Pasteur's quadrant is a label given to a class of scientific research methods that both seek fundamental understanding of scientific problems, and, at the same time, seek to be eventually beneficial to society.
Revised: Pasteur's quadrant is a classification of scientific research methods that both seek fundamental understanding of scientific problems, and, at the same time, seek to be eventually beneficial to society.
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Original: Pasteur's quadrant is a label given to a class of scientific research methods that both seek fundamental understanding of scientific problems, and, at the same time, seek to be eventually beneficial to society.
Revised: Pasteur's quadrant is a label given to a class of scientific research projects that both seek fundamental understanding of scientific problems, and, at the same time, seek to be eventually beneficial to society.
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Original: Pasteur's quadrant is a label given to a class of scientific research methods that both seek fundamental understanding of scientific problems, and, at the same time, seek to be eventually beneficial to society.
Revised: Pasteur's quadrant is a label given to a class of scientific research methods that both seek fundamental understanding of scientific problems, while also having immediate use for society.
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Original: Pasteur's quadrant is a classification of scientific research projects that both seek fundamental understanding of scientific problems, while also having immediate use for society.
Revised: Pasteur's quadrant is a classification of scientific research projects that seek fundamental understanding of scientific problems, while also having immediate use for society.
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Original:  Yes 75px | Neils Bohr
Revised:  Yes 75px | Niels Bohr
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Original:  Leon subsequently notes Coetzee's appointment as "the most significant" he made during his 13-year tenure as leader of the party.
Revised:  Leon subsequently noted Coetzee's appointment as "the most significant" he made during his 13-year tenure as leader of the party.
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Original: Tony Leon, On The Contrary, 2008, Jonathan Ball, ISBN 978-1-86842-305-7, pg. 298 Since 1999, Coetzee has been the party's chief strategist, playing a central role in the party's election campaigns,"Strategy is the steering wheel" which have seen the DA grow from 1.7\% in 1994 to 24.2\% in the 2011 local government elections.
Revised: Tony Leon, On The Contrary, 2008, Jonathan Ball, ISBN 978-1-86842-305-7, pg. 298 From 1999, Coetzee has been the party's chief strategist, playing a central role in the party's election campaigns,"Strategy is the steering wheel" which have seen the DA grow from 1.7\% in 1994 to 24.2\% in the 2011 local government elections.
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Original: Tony Leon, On The Contrary, 2008, Jonathan Ball, ISBN 978-1-86842-305-7, pg. 298 Since 1999, Coetzee has been the party's chief strategist, playing a central role in the party's election campaigns,"Strategy is the steering wheel" which have seen the DA grow from 1.7\% in 1994 to 24.2\% in the 2011 local government elections.
Revised: Tony Leon, On The Contrary, 2008, Jonathan Ball, ISBN 978-1-86842-305-7, pg. 298 Since 1999, Coetzee was the party's chief strategist, playing a central role in the party's election campaigns,"Strategy is the steering wheel" which have seen the DA grow from 1.7\% in 1994 to 24.2\% in the 2011 local government elections.
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Original: Tony Leon, On The Contrary, 2008, Jonathan Ball, ISBN 978-1-86842-305-7, pg. 298 Since 1999, Coetzee has been the party's chief strategist, playing a central role in the party's election campaigns,"Strategy is the steering wheel" which have seen the DA grow from 1.7\% in 1994 to 24.2\% in the 2011 local government elections.
Revised: Tony Leon, On The Contrary, 2008, Jonathan Ball, ISBN 978-1-86842-305-7, pg. 298 Since 1999, Coetzee has been the party's chief strategist, playing a central role in the party's election campaigns,"Strategy is the steering wheel" which saw the DA grow from 1.7\% in 1994 to 24.2\% in the 2011 local government elections.
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Original:  This marketing campaign is the response of the Hong Kong Executive to the 2019–20 _Hong_Kong_protests which has seen Hong Kong and China accused of reneging on the Sino-British Joint Declaration which had promised Hong Kong would be kept separate from China's authoritarian rule for 50 years from 1997.
Revised:  This marketing campaign is the response of the Hong Kong Executive to the 2019–20 Hong Kong protests which has seen Hong Kong and China accused of reneging on the Sino-British Joint Declaration which had promised Hong Kong would be kept separate from China's authoritarian rule for 50 years from 1997.
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Original: American football  wide receivers Category:Burials in Louisiana Category:Cincinnati Bengals players Category:People from Belle Chasse, Louisiana Category:People with traumatic brain injuries Category:Players of American football from Louisiana Category:Prisoners and detainees of Kentucky Category:Road incident deaths in North Carolina Category:Truck road incident deaths Category:West Virginia Mountaineers football players Category:Organ transplant dono
Revised: American football wide receivers Category:Burials in Louisiana Category:Cincinnati Bengals players Category:People from Belle Chasse, Louisiana Category:Players of American football from Louisiana Category:Prisoners and detainees of Kentucky Category:Road incident deaths in North Carolina Category:Truck road incident deaths Category:West Virginia Mountaineers football players Category:Organ transplant dono
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Original: American football wide receivers Category:Burials in Louisiana Category:Cincinnati Bengals players Category:People from Belle Chasse, Louisiana Category:Players of American football from Louisiana Category:Prisoners and detainees of Kentucky Category:Road incident deaths in North Carolina Category:Truck road incident deaths Category:West Virginia Mountaineers football players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:20th-century African-American  peop
Revised: American football wide receivers Category:Burials in Louisiana Category:Cincinnati Bengals players Category:People from Belle Chasse, Louisiana Category:Players of American football from Louisiana Category:Prisoners and detainees of Kentucky Category:Road incident deaths in North Carolina Category:Truck road incident deaths Category:West Virginia Mountaineers football players Category:Organ transplant donors Category:20th-century African-American people Category:21st-century African-American peop
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Original:  Tonga has three children by Henry.
Revised:  Tonga has three children with Henry.
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Original:  This results in less downtime and less isruption to business critical systems.
Revised:  This results in less downtime and less disruption to business critical systems.
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Original: Problem Management is the process responsible for managing the lifecycle of all problems  .
Revised: Problem Management is the process responsible for managing the lifecycle of all problems that happen or could happen in an IT service .
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Original:  The purpose is to see which event trigger the next event and so on, or to rule out some possible events.
Revised:  The purpose is to see which event triggers the next event and so on, or to rule out some possible events.
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Original:  The Information Technology Infrastructure Library defines a problem as the cause of one or more incidents.
Revised:  ITIL defines a problem as the cause of one or more incidents.
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Original:  She later served as a director of the Bank of Canada and , on June 24, 2005 , she was appointed to the Security Intelligence Review Committee and the Queen's Privy Council for Canada.
Revised:  Appointed to the Privy Council of Canada , on June 24, 2005 , she was appointed to the Security Intelligence Review Committee and the Queen's Privy Council for Canada.
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Original:  She later served as a director of the Bank of Canada and , on June 24, 2005 , she was appointed to the Security Intelligence Review Committee and the Queen's Privy Council for Canada.
Revised:  She later served as a director of the Bank of Canada and , 2005 , she was appointed to the Security Intelligence Review Committee and the Queen's Privy Council for Canada.
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Original:  She is president of   Landal Inc.  , offering integrated services in organizational and business development, and in International Cooperation , vice-president of Diversis Inc., specializing in immigration and diversity, a co-owner of Boutique ProWeb, a specialist in e-commerce and e-marketing, and a partner/investor in several start-ups.
Revised:  She is president of Landal Inc. , offering integrated services in organizational and business development, and in International Cooperation . She is vice-president of Diversis Inc., specializing in immigration and diversity, a co-owner of Boutique ProWeb, a specialist in e-commerce and e-marketing, and a partner/investor in several start-ups.
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Original:  A former chair of the Atlantic Provinces Economic Council , she was a member of the Board of Directors of the Bank of Canada from 1995 to 2005 and of the Security Intelligence Review Committee from 2005 to 2008.
Revised:  A former chair of the Atlantic Provinces Economic Council and was a member of the Board of Directors of the Bank of Canada from 1995 to 2005 and of the Security Intelligence Review Committee from 2005 to 2008.
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Original:  Professional and Business Background 1993-Now: President of Landal Inc.
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Original:  Director of Legal Translation and Computerization for the New Brunswick Department of Justice From 1971 to 1975: Legal counsel with the 1973 Revised Statutes of New Brunswick Project, Department of Justice%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Political career Landry served as president of the New Brunswick Liberal Association and became a trusted advisor, along with her husband, to Frank McKenna upon his election as leader of the party in 1985.
Revised:  Director of Legal Translation and Computerization for the New Brunswick Department of Justice %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Political career Landry served as president of the New Brunswick Liberal Association and became a trusted advisor, along with her husband, to Frank McKenna upon his election as leader of the party in 1985.
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Original: Early life and education She was born Marie-Marthe Aldéa Lanteigne in Sainte-Cécile, New BrunswickAldea Landry l'education la cle vers tout horizon Acadie Nouvelle Landry recieved a Bachelor of Arts degree from the Université de Moncton and a Bachelor of Laws from the University of New Brunswick.
Revised: Early life and education She was born Marie-Marthe Aldéa Lanteigne in Sainte-Cécile, New Brunswick.Aldea Landry l'education la cle vers tout horizon Acadie Nouvelle Landry recieved a Bachelor of Arts degree from the Université de Moncton and a Bachelor of Laws from the University of New Brunswick.
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Original:  By profession he was a mechanic  .
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Original:  By profession he was a mechanic  .
Revised:  By profession he was a mechanic , by trade .
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Original:  He was a mechanic , by trade.
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Original:  He was educated at Roman Catholic schools in Bilbao before taking an apprenticeship in as a shipyard worker, a route that led to unemployment as Spain's shipping industry was in terminal decline.
Revised:  He was educated at Roman Catholic schools in Bilbao before taking an apprenticeship as a shipyard worker, a route that led to unemployment as Spain's shipping industry was in terminal decline.
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