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Original: JPG|Tarek Kamel addressing the 2009 Internet Governance Forum]]Egyptian Communication and Information Technology Minister Tarek Kamel announced on Sunday that the country had filed an application and that registration for the ".misr" (".Egypt") top-level domain name (مصر‎ in Arabic) would begin as of midnight (2200 UTC) at an Internet conference sponsored by the United Nations.
Revised: JPG|Tarek Kamel addressing the 2009 Internet Governance Forum]]Egyptian Communication and Information Technology Minister Tarek Kamel announced on Sunday that the country had filed an application and that registration for the ".misr" (".Egypt") top-level domain (مصر‎ in Arabic) would begin as of midnight (2200 UTC) at an Internet conference sponsored by the United Nations.
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Original:  According to Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) chief executive Rod Beckstrom, six countries have applied for top-level domains in three languages since the internet regulator opened up the use of non Latin scripts yesterday.
Revised:  According to Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) chief executive Rod Beckstrom, six countries have applied for top-level domains in three languages since the Internet regulator opened up the use of non Latin scripts yesterday.
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Original:  The opening of Internet Domain Names (IDN) to non Latin characters is the fruit of six years of discussions and technical work, resulting in the ICANN voting on October 30 to allow the new domain names.
Revised:  The opening of Internet Domain Names (IDN) , containing non-Latin characters is the fruit of six years of discussions and technical work, resulting in the ICANN voting on October 30 to allow the new domain names.
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Original:  It has  called the move the "biggest change" to the internet "since it was invented 40 years ago".
Revised:  It has been called the move the "biggest change" to the internet "since it was invented 40 years ago".
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Original:  It has  called the move the "biggest change" to the internet "since it was invented 40 years ago".
Revised:  It has called the move the "biggest change" to the Internet "since it was invented 40 years ago".
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Original:  "Over half the internet users around the world don't use a Latin-based script as their native language," commented Rod Beckstrom, president of the ICANN. "IDNs are about making the internet more global and accessible for everyone."
Revised:  "Over half the Internet users around the world don't use a Latin-based script as their native language," commented Rod Beckstrom, president of the ICANN. "IDNs are about making the internet more global and accessible for everyone."
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Original:  "Over half the internet users around the world don't use a Latin-based script as their native language," commented Rod Beckstrom, president of the ICANN. "IDNs are about making the internet more global and accessible for everyone."
Revised:  "Over half the internet users around the world don't use a Latin-based script as their native language," commented Rod Beckstrom, president of the ICANN. "IDNs are about making the Internet more global and accessible for everyone."
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Original:  The IGF conference will address access to the internet , notably local content reflecting different cultures and languages.
Revised:  The IGF conference will address access to the Internet , notably local content reflecting different cultures and languages.
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Original:  Other key topics are cybercrime and safe internet usage.
Revised:  Other key topics are cybercrime and safe Internet usage.
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Original:  ICANN, a non-profit, private organisation, currently limits the registration of new domains to national governments  , although domain names will be available to individuals at a later date via national regulators
Revised:  ICANN, a non-profit, private organisation, currently limits the application for new domains to national governments , although domain names will be available to individuals at a later date via national regulators
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Original:  ICANN, a non-profit, private organisation, currently limits the registration of new domains to national governments  , although domain names will be available to individuals at a later date via national regulators
Revised:  ICANN, a non-profit, private organisation, currently limits the registration of new domains to national governments , although domain names will be available to individuals at a later date via national registries
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Original: JPG|Tarek Kamel addressing the 2009 Internet Governance Forum]]Egyptian Communication and Information Technology Minister Tarek Kamel announced on Sunday that the country had filed an application and that registrations for domains in the ".misr" (".Egypt") top-level domain (مصر‎ in Arabic)  would begin as of midnight (2200 UTC) at an Internet conference sponsored by the United Nations.
Revised: JPG|Tarek Kamel addressing the 2009 Internet Governance Forum]]Egyptian Communication and Information Technology Minister Tarek Kamel announced on Sunday that the country had filed an application for the ".misr" (".Egypt") top-level domain (مصر‎ in Arabic) would begin as of midnight (2200 UTC) at an Internet conference sponsored by the United Nations.
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Original:  According to Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) chief executive Rod Beckstrom, six countries have applied for top-level domains in three languages since the Internet regulator opened up the use of non Latin scripts yesterday.
Revised:  According to Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) chief executive Rod Beckstrom, six countries have applied for top-level domains in three languages since the Internet coordinator opened up the use of non Latin scripts yesterday.
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Original:  Annexed after the 1967 war, East Jerusalem is what Palestinians still hope to make the capitol of their future state.
Revised:  Annexed after the 1967 war, East Jerusalem is what Palestinians still hope to make the capital of their future state.
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Original:  However, the current Israeli government has made claim to Jerusalem as the capitol of Israel.
Revised:  However, the current Israeli government has made claim to Jerusalem as the capital of Israel.
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Original:  Sgt Ben Knight, 25, was amongst the fourteen killed when Nimrod XV230 crashed in 2006 
Revised:  Sgt Ben Knight, 25, was amongst the fourteen killed when Nimrod XV230 crashed in 2006. 
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Original:  The Loss Of RAF Nimrod XV230, A Failure Of Leadership, Culture And Priorities stated that the accident was preventable and that the Ministry of Defence  made spending cuts a priority over safety.
Revised:  The Loss Of RAF Nimrod XV230, A Failure Of Leadership, Culture And Priorities stated that the accident was preventable and that the Ministry of Defence (MoD) made spending cuts a priority over safety.
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Original:  A 2005 review into Nimrod safety  "riddled with errors," the report found    
Revised:  A 2005 review into Nimrod safety was "riddled with errors," the report found 
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Original:  A 2005 review into Nimrod safety  "riddled with errors," the report found    
Revised:  A 2005 review into Nimrod safety "riddled with errors," the report found . 
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Original: Following a new report into the loss of a Nimrod jet belonging to the UK's Royal Air Force over Afghanistan the family of one of the victims are seeking a criminal prosecution.
Revised: Following a new report into the loss of a Nimrod jet belonging to the UK's Royal Air Force over Afghanistan the family of one of the victims is seeking a criminal prosecution.
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Original:  Sgt Ben Knight,  25, was amongst the fourteen killed when Nimrod XV230 crashed in 2006.
Revised:  Sergeant Ben Knight, 25, was amongst the fourteen killed when Nimrod XV230 crashed in 2006.
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Original:  Sgt Ben Knight,  25, was amongst the fourteen killed when Nimrod XV230 crashed in 2006.
Revised:  Sgt Ben Knight, aged 25, was amongst the fourteen killed when Nimrod XV230 crashed in 2006.
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Original:  Sgt Ben Knight,  25, was amongst the fourteen killed when Nimrod XV230 crashed in 2006.
Revised:  Sgt Ben Knight, 25, was among the fourteen killed when Nimrod XV230 crashed in 2006.
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Original:  Sgt Knight's parents have applied via their lawyers Smithfield Partners to the Crown Prosecution Service to consider evidence contained in a report by Charles Haddon-Cave QC, who is due to appear before the House of Commons next month.
Revised:  Knight's parents have applied via their lawyers Smithfield Partners to the Crown Prosecution Service to consider evidence contained in a report by Charles Haddon-Cave QC, who is due to appear before the House of Commons next month.
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Original:  XV230 had shortly completed air-to-air refueling on September 2, 2006  when it was destroyed by an explosion.
Revised:  XV230 had shortly completed air-to-air refueling on September 2, 2006 , when it was destroyed by an explosion.
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Original:  The latest report names five people in the MoD, three with BAE Systems and two with defence company QinetiQ  as responsible
Revised:  The latest report names five people in the MoD, three with BAE Systems and two with defence company QinetiQ , as responsible
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Original:  Both the Crown Prosecution Service has said they will consider the matter  and the Health and Safety Executive said it could not comment this early on in developments.
Revised:  The Crown Prosecution Service has said they will consider the matter and the Health and Safety Executive said it could not comment this early on in developments.
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Original:  Both the Crown Prosecution Service has said they will consider the matter  and the Health and Safety Executive said it could not comment this early on in developments.
Revised:  Both the Crown Prosecution Service has promised consider the matter and the Health and Safety Executive said it could not comment this early on in developments.
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Original:  Both the Crown Prosecution Service has said they will consider the matter  and the Health and Safety Executive said it could not comment this early on in developments.
Revised:  Both the Crown Prosecution Service has said they will consider the matter , and the Health and Safety Executive said it could not comment this early on in developments.
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Original: The governing body of world football, FIFA have threaten Iraq with expulsion after the Iraqi Olympic Committee took control of the countries governing body of football and disbanded it.
Revised: The governing body of world football, FIFA , has threatened Iraq with expulsion after the Iraqi Olympic Committee took control of the countries governing body of football and disbanded it.
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Original:  FIFA have given the county 72 hours to restore the Iraq Football Association or the case will be referred to FIFA’s emergency committee.
Revised:  FIFA has given the country 72 hours to restore the Iraq Football Association or the case will be referred to FIFA’s emergency committee.
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Original:  The IOC have blamed the IFA for the FIFA ban on the country not being allowed to host international friendly matches due to security reasons.
Revised:  The IOC has blamed the IFA for the FIFA ban on the country not being allowed to host international friendly matches due to security reasons.
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Original:  Since the 2003 invasion by American forces  Iraq has hosted two internationals matches, both against Palestine.
Revised:  Since the 2003 invasion by American forces , Iraq has hosted two internationals matches, both against Palestine.
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Original:  They are due to play against the United Arab Emirates on Wednesday but general ban remains in place.
Revised:  They are due to play against the United Arab Emirates on Wednesday , but a general ban remains in place.
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Original:  A statement was released on the FIFA website saying " Fifa appeals once more to all stakeholders in Iraq to respect the autonomy of sport in general and the IFA in particular and to allow IFA to conduct its affairs according its statutes and those of Fifa ." Should the case be passed over to FIFA’s emergency committee  it would most likely result in a ban from the sport
Revised:  A statement was released on the FIFA website saying " FIFA appeals once more to all stakeholders in Iraq to respect the autonomy of sport in general and the IFA in particular and to allow IFA to conduct its affairs according its statutes and those of Fifa ." Should the case be passed over to FIFA’s emergency committee it would most likely result in a ban from the sport
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Original:  A statement was released on the FIFA website saying " Fifa appeals once more to all stakeholders in Iraq to respect the autonomy of sport in general and the IFA in particular and to allow IFA to conduct its affairs according its statutes and those of Fifa ." Should the case be passed over to FIFA’s emergency committee  it would most likely result in a ban from the sport
Revised:  A statement was released on the FIFA website saying " Fifa appeals once more to all stakeholders in Iraq to respect the autonomy of sport in general and the IFA in particular and to allow IFA to conduct its affairs according its statutes and those of FIFA ." Should the case be passed over to FIFA’s emergency committee it would most likely result in a ban from the sport
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Original:  A statement was released on the FIFA website saying " Fifa appeals once more to all stakeholders in Iraq to respect the autonomy of sport in general and the IFA in particular and to allow IFA to conduct its affairs according its statutes and those of Fifa ." Should the case be passed over to FIFA’s emergency committee  it would most likely result in a ban from the sport
Revised:  A statement was released on the FIFA website saying " Fifa appeals once more to all stakeholders in Iraq to respect the autonomy of sport in general and the IFA in particular and to allow IFA to conduct its affairs according its statutes and those of Fifa ." Should the case be passed over to FIFA’s emergency committee , it would most likely result in a ban from the sport
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Original: The governing body of world football, FIFA, has threatened Iraq with expulsion after the Iraqi Olympic Committee took control of the countries governing body of football and disbanded it.
Revised: The governing body of world football, FIFA, has threatened Iraq with expulsion after the Iraqi Olympic Committee took control of the country's governing body of football and disbanded it.
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Original:  FIFA has given the country 72 hours to restore the Iraq Football Association or the case will be referred to FIFA’s emergency committee.
Revised:  FIFA has given the country 72 hours to restore the Iraq Football Association (IFA); if this is not done, the case is to be referred to FIFA’s emergency committee.
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Original:  The IFA and  IOC have disputed over who controls the game in the country for several years.
Revised:  The IFA and the IOC have disputed over who controls the game in the country for several years.
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Original:  A statement was released on the FIFA website saying "FIFA appeals once more to all stakeholders in Iraq to respect the autonomy of sport in general and the IFA in particular and to allow IFA to conduct its affairs according its statutes and those of FIFA."
Revised:  A statement was released on the FIFA website said: "FIFA appeals once more to all stakeholders in Iraq to respect the autonomy of sport in general and the IFA in particular and to allow IFA to conduct its affairs according its statutes and those of FIFA."
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Original: The governing body of world football, FIFA, has threatened Iraq with expulsion after the Iraqi Olympic Committee  took control of the country's governing body of football and disbanded it.
Revised: The governing body of world football, FIFA, has threatened Iraq with expulsion after the Iraqi Olympic Committee (IOC) took control of the country's governing body of football and disbanded it.
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Original: The incident happened when the ferry Nay Win Tun ran into an oil barge in the Irrawaddy delta, causing it to sink.
Revised: The Nay Win Tun ran into an oil barge in the Irrawaddy delta, causing it to sink.
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Original: Thirty-four-year-old African-American Uganda T. Harris from Bellwood was accused of embezzling over $36,000 from the tollway authority in a period of six months.
Revised: Thirty-four-year-old Uganda T. Harris from Bellwood was accused of embezzling over $36,000 from the tollway authority in a period of six months.
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Original: Thirty-four-year-old African-American Uganda T. Harris from Bellwood was accused of embezzling over $36,000 from the tollway authority in a period of six months.
Revised: Thirty-four-year-old Ugandan T. Harris from Bellwood was accused of embezzling over $36,000 from the tollway authority in a period of six months.
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Original: Thirty-four-year-old Ugandan T. Harris from Bellwood was accused of embezzling over $36,000 from the tollway authority in a period of six months.
Revised: Thirty-four-year-old Uganda T. Harris from Bellwood was accused of embezzling over $36,000 from the tollway authority in a period of six months.
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Original:  The US State Departement also criticised evictions of Palestinian families and demolition of their homes.
Revised:  The US Departement of State also criticised evictions of Palestinian families and demolition of their homes.
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Original:  With the credibility of the US leader diminishing, French President Nicolas Sarkozy has recently started meeting with a number of Middle East leaders in the past week, attempting to reconcile with Syria and meeting with King Abdullah of Saudi Arabia  
Revised:  With the credibility of the US leader diminishing, French President Nicolas Sarkozy has recently started meeting with a number of Middle East leaders in the past week, attempting to reconcile with Syria and meeting with King Abdullah of Saudi Arabia . 
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Original: File:Israel 7 010 Jerusalem.jpg|View of east Jerusalem]]United States and United Kingdom spokesmen have added to the criticism from United Nations Secretary General Ban Ki-moon who claimed that Israel's decision to authorise a further 900 homes in east Jerusalem will "undermine efforts for peace and cast doubt on the viability of the two-state solution".
Revised: File:Israel 7 010 Jerusalem.jpg|View of east Jerusalem]]United States and United Kingdom spokespeople have added to the criticism from United Nations Secretary General Ban Ki-moon who claimed that Israel's decision to authorise a further 900 homes in east Jerusalem will "undermine efforts for peace and cast doubt on the viability of the two-state solution".
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Original: File:Israel 7 010 Jerusalem.jpg|View of east Jerusalem]]United States and United Kingdom spokesmen have added to the criticism from United Nations Secretary General Ban Ki-moon who claimed that Israel's decision to authorise a further 900 homes in east Jerusalem will "undermine efforts for peace and cast doubt on the viability of the two-state solution".
Revised: File:Israel 7 010 Jerusalem.jpg|View of east Jerusalem]]United States and United Kingdom spokesmen have added to criticism from United Nations Secretary General Ban Ki-moon who claimed that Israel's decision to authorise a further 900 homes in east Jerusalem will "undermine efforts for peace and cast doubt on the viability of the two-state solution".
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Original: File:Israel 7 010 Jerusalem.jpg|View of east Jerusalem]]United States and United Kingdom spokesmen have added to the criticism from United Nations Secretary General Ban Ki-moon who claimed that Israel's decision to authorise a further 900 homes in east Jerusalem will "undermine efforts for peace and cast doubt on the viability of the two-state solution".
Revised: File:Israel 7 010 Jerusalem.jpg|View of east Jerusalem]]United States and United Kingdom spokesmen have added to the criticism from United Nations Secretary-General Ban Ki-moon who claimed that Israel's decision to authorise a further 900 homes in east Jerusalem will "undermine efforts for peace and cast doubt on the viability of the two-state solution".
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Original: File:Israel 7 010 Jerusalem.jpg|View of east Jerusalem]]United States and United Kingdom spokesmen have added to the criticism from United Nations Secretary General Ban Ki-moon who claimed that Israel's decision to authorise a further 900 homes in east Jerusalem will "undermine efforts for peace and cast doubt on the viability of the two-state solution".
Revised: File:Israel 7 010 Jerusalem.jpg|View of east Jerusalem]]United States and United Kingdom spokesmen have added to the criticism from United Nations Secretary General Ban Ki-moon that Israel's decision to authorise a further 900 homes in east Jerusalem will "undermine efforts for peace and cast doubt on the viability of the two-state solution".
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Original:  A spokesman for Ban Ki-moon was clear.
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Original:  A spokesman for Ban Ki-moon was clear.
Revised:  A spokesman for Ban Ki-moon stated,
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Original:  "The secretary-general deplores the government of Israel' s decision today to expand Gilo settlement, built on Palestinian territory occupied by Israel in the 1967 war."
Revised:  "The Secretary-General deplores the Government of Israel’ s decision today to expand Gilo settlement, built on Palestinian territory occupied by Israel in the 1967 war."
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Original:  "We are dismayed at the Jerusalem planning committee's decision to move forward on the approval process for the expansion of Gilo in Jerusalem," said White House spokesman Robert Gibbs.
Revised:  "We are dismayed at the Jerusalem planning committee's decision to move forward on the approval process for the expansion of Gilo in Jerusalem," said White House spokesperson Robert Gibbs.
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Original:  The US Departement of State also criticised evictions of Palestinian families and demolition of their homes.
Revised:  US Department of State spokesperson Ian Kelly added,
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Original:  "We object to this  and we object to other Israeli practices in Jerusalem related to housing, including the continuing pattern of evictions and demolition of Palestinian homes , " said spokesman Ian Kelly.
Revised:  "We object to this , and we object to other Israeli practices in Jerusalem related to housing, including the continuing pattern of evictions and demolition of Palestinian homes , " said spokesman Ian Kelly.
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Original:  "We object to this  and we object to other Israeli practices in Jerusalem related to housing, including the continuing pattern of evictions and demolition of Palestinian homes , " said spokesman Ian Kelly.
Revised:  "We object to this and we object to other Israeli practices in Jerusalem related to housing, including the continuing pattern of evictions and demolitions of Palestinian homes , " said spokesman Ian Kelly.
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Original:  "We object to this  and we object to other Israeli practices in Jerusalem related to housing, including the continuing pattern of evictions and demolition of Palestinian homes , " said spokesman Ian Kelly.
Revised:  "We object to this and we object to other Israeli practices in Jerusalem related to housing, including the continuing pattern of evictions and demolition of Palestinian homes " said spokesman Ian Kelly.
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