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Original: The Wikimedia Foundation, a non-profit organization which administers online collaborative websites including Wikipedia and Wikinews, announced Tuesday that its general counsel Mike Godwin would be departing effective this Friday.
Revised: The Wikimedia Foundation, a non-profit organization which administers online collaborative websites including Wikipedia and Wikinews, announced Tuesday that its general counsel Mike Godwin will leave his job on Friday.
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Original:  He is noted for coining "Godwin's Law", an Internet maxim which states, "As an online discussion grows longer, the probability of a comparison involving Nazis or Hitler approaches one."
Revised:  He is noted for proposing "Godwin's Law", an Internet maxim which states, "As an online discussion grows longer, the probability of a comparison involving Nazis or Hitler approaches one."
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Original: The Wikimedia Foundation, a non-profit organization which administers online collaborative websites including Wikipedia and Wikinews, announced Tuesday that its general counsel Mike Godwin will leave his job on Friday.
Revised: The Wikimedia Foundation, a non-profit organization which administers online collaborative websites including Wikipedia and Wikinews, announced Tuesday that its general counsel Mike Godwin would be departing effective this Friday.
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Original: The Wikimedia Foundation, a non-profit organization which administers online collaborative websites including Wikipedia and Wikinews, announced yesterday that its general counsel Mike Godwin would be departing effective this Friday.
Revised: The Wikimedia Foundation, a non-profit organization which administers online collaborative websites including Wikipedia and Wikinews, announced yesterday that its general counsel Mike Godwin will leave his position this Friday.
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Original:  Scotland needs a united Labour party , "  he said yesterday.
Revised:  Scotland needs a united Labour party " he said yesterday.
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Original:  Scotland needs a united Labour party , "  he said yesterday.
Revised:  Scotland needs a united Labour party , " , he said yesterday.
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Original:  "It is clear that the small minority who didn’t accept my election as party leader by the majority 5 months ago also won’t accept the vote of the Executive today and will continue to divide the party if I remain , "  he said.
Revised:  "It is clear that the small minority who didn’t accept my election as party leader by the majority five months ago also won’t accept the vote of the Executive today and will continue to divide the party if I remain , " he said.
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Original:  "It is clear that the small minority who didn’t accept my election as party leader by the majority 5 months ago also won’t accept the vote of the Executive today and will continue to divide the party if I remain , "  he said.
Revised:  "It is clear that the small minority who didn’t accept my election as party leader by the majority 5 months ago also won’t accept the vote of the Executive today and will continue to divide the party if I remain " he said.
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Original:  "It is clear that the small minority who didn’t accept my election as party leader by the majority 5 months ago also won’t accept the vote of the Executive today and will continue to divide the party if I remain , "  he said.
Revised:  "It is clear that the small minority who didn’t accept my election as party leader by the majority 5 months ago also won’t accept the vote of the Executive today and will continue to divide the party if I remain , " , he said.
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Original:  Murphy singled out McCluskey for criticism, claiming he had "been at the centre of a campaign by the London leadership of the Unite union in blaming myself and the Scottish Labour party for the defeat of the UK Labour party in the general election.
Revised:  Murphy singled out McCluskey for criticism, claiming to have "been at the centre of a campaign by the London leadership of the Unite union in blaming myself and the Scottish Labour party for the defeat of the UK Labour party in the general election.
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Original:  Until Scottish Labour holds what will be its eighth leadership election in six years , , currently the party's deputy leader, shall assume the role of acting leader for the time being.
Revised:  Until Scottish Labour holds a fresh leadership election — its sixth in a span of eight years — , currently the party's deputy leader, shall assume the role of acting leader for the time being.
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Original:  Until Scottish Labour holds what will be its eighth leadership election in six years , , currently the party's deputy leader, shall assume the role of acting leader for the time being.
Revised:  Until Scottish Labour holds what will be its eighth leadership election in six years , , currently the party's deputy leader, is to assume the role of acting leader for the time being.
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Original:  Calls for Murphy to resign came from multiple quarters, including s and , as well as Labour s , and . Earlier in the week, Unite general secretary said "the anti-Scottish card that was played by and the Conservatives" had caused them to win a majority in the general election and for Labour to lose seats 26 seats across the UK , before going on to say: "I lay the blame for that very squarely at the feet of Scottish Labour.
Revised:  Calls for Murphy to resign came from multiple quarters, including s and , as well as Labour s , and . Earlier in the week, Unite general secretary said "the anti-Scottish card that was played by and the Conservatives" had caused them to win a majority in the general election , before going on to say: "I lay the blame for that very squarely at the feet of Scottish Labour.
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Original:  Calls for Murphy to resign came from multiple quarters, including s and , as well as Labour s , and . Earlier in the week, Unite general secretary said "the anti-Scottish card that was played by and the Conservatives" had caused them to win a majority in the general election, before going on to say: "I lay the blame for that very squarely at the feet of Scottish Labour.
Revised:  Calls for Murphy to resign came from multiple quarters, including s and , as well as Labour s and . Earlier in the week, Unite general secretary said "the anti-Scottish card that was played by and the Conservatives" had caused them to win a majority in the general election, before going on to say: "I lay the blame for that very squarely at the feet of Scottish Labour.
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Original:  Not only have they lost Scotland but I think they've been responsible for making certain that the Conservatives were back in power in ." However, former Labour MP and trade unions and were amongst those supporting Murphy's continued leadership.
Revised:  Not only have they lost Scotland but I think they've been responsible for making certain that the Conservatives were back in power in ." However, trade unions and were amongst those supporting Murphy's continued leadership.
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Original:  He was going to be riding former Australian Derby winner Shoot Ou 
Revised:  He was going to be riding former Australian Derby winner Shoot Out. 
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Original: Born in Toowoomba  Katsidis had recorded over 170 victories ast season.
Revised: Born in Toowoomba , Katsidis had recorded over 170 victories ast season.
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Original:  He had previously battled drug and weight problems in the pas 
Revised:  He had previously battled drug and weight problems in the past. 
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Original:  It's a total shock." Jockey Corey Brown said "He was a terrific guy, loaded with ability and is going to be sadly missed   
Revised:  It's a total shock." Jockey Corey Brown said "He was a terrific guy, loaded with ability and is going to be sadly missed ." 
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Original: One of Australia's leading jockey's Stathi Katsidis has been found dead at the age of 31. Katsidid was found dead on Tuesday morning by his fiancee, Melissa Jackson.
Revised: One of Australia's leading jockey's Stathi Katsidis has been found dead at the age of 31. He was found dead on Tuesday morning by his fiancee, Melissa Jackson.
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Original:  He has died less than a week before he was due to ride in the Cox Plate and was also set to ride in the Melbourne cup in November.
Revised:  Katsidis has died less than a week before he was due to ride in the Cox Plate and was also set to ride in the Melbourne cup in November.
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Original: Toowoomba in 2005 Katsidis has died less than a week before he was due to ride in the Cox Plate and was also set to ride in the Melbourne cup in November.
Revised: Toowoomba in 2005 Katsidis died less than a week before he was due to ride in the Cox Plate and was also set to ride in the Melbourne cup in November.
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Original: Toowoomba in 2005 Katsidis died less than a week before he was due to ride in the Cox Plate and was also set to ride in the Melbourne cup in November.
Revised: Toowoomba in 2005 Katsidis died less than a week before he was due to ride in the Cox Plate and was set to ride in the Melbourne cup in November.
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Original:  His funeral has been set for next Tuesday but exact plans have yet to be released
Revised:  His funeral has been set for next Tuesday ; exact plans have yet to be released
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Original: right right Online auction company , eBay is in talks with VOIP provider to Skype to acquire Skype for $5 billion.
Revised: right right Online auction company eBay is in talks with VOIP provider to Skype to acquire Skype for $5 billion.
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Original: right right Online auction company , eBay is in talks with VOIP provider to Skype to acquire Skype for $5 billion.
Revised: right right Online auction company , eBay is in talks with Voice over IP provider Skype to acquire Skype for $5 billion.
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Original:  Many believe that eBay wants in on the rapidly-expanding VOIP market and give recent entries , Google and Microsoft a run for their money.
Revised:  Many believe that eBay intends to enter the rapidly-expanding VOIP market and give recent entries , Google and Microsoft a run for their money.
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Original:  Many believe that eBay wants in on the rapidly-expanding VOIP market and give recent entries , Google and Microsoft a run for their money.
Revised:  Many believe that eBay wants in on the rapidly-expanding VoIP market and give recent entries , Google and Microsoft a run for their money.
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Original:  Many believe that eBay wants in on the rapidly-expanding VOIP market and give recent entries , Google and Microsoft a run for their money.
Revised:  Many believe that eBay wants in on the rapidly-expanding VOIP market and give recent entries Google and Microsoft a run for their money.
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Original:  The speculation that ebay may buy the small Luxembourg-based company sent their shares down four percent on Wall Street.
Revised:  The speculation that eBay may buy the small Luxembourg-based company sent their shares down four percent on Wall Street.
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Original:  Last month, Rupert Murdoch, CEO of News Corporation was in talks with Skype on possibly buying the company.
Revised:  Last month, Rupert Murdoch, CEO of News Corporation was in talks with Skype to possibly buy the company.
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Original:  VOIP, or voice over IP as it is know, is becoming an increasing threat to tradtional telecom since most calls from one computer to another are free and some uers wonder why a seperate land line is needed.
Revised:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies since most calls from one computer to another are free and some uers wonder why a seperate land line is needed.
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Original:  VOIP, or voice over IP as it is know, is becoming an increasing threat to tradtional telecom since most calls from one computer to another are free and some uers wonder why a seperate land line is needed.
Revised:  VOIP, or voice over IP as it is know, is becoming an increasing threat to tradtional telecom since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a seperate land line is needed.
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Original:  VOIP, or voice over IP as it is know, is becoming an increasing threat to tradtional telecom since most calls from one computer to another are free and some uers wonder why a seperate land line is needed.
Revised:  VOIP, or voice over IP as it is know, is becoming an increasing threat to tradtional telecom since most calls from one computer to another are free and some uers wonder why a separate land line is needed.
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Original:  Skype was founded by the founders of P2P file-sharing program KaZaA
Revised:  Skype was founded by the creators of P2P file-sharing program KaZaA
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Original: right right Online auction company eBay is in talks with Voice over IP  provider Skype to acquire Skype for $5 billion.
Revised: right right Online auction company eBay is in talks with Voice over IP (VoIP) provider Skype to acquire Skype for $5 billion.
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Original:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies  since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is  needed.
Revised:  VoIP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is needed.
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Original:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies  since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is  needed.
Revised:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly significant threat to traditional telephone companies since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is needed.
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Original:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies  since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is  needed.
Revised:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies , since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is needed.
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Original:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies  since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is  needed.
Revised:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies since most calls between computers are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is needed.
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Original:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies  since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is  needed.
Revised:  Voice over IP is becoming an increasingly important threat to traditional telephone companies since most calls from one computer to another are free and some users wonder why a separate land line is still needed.
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Original: right right Online auction company eBay is in talks with Voice over IP (VoIP) provider Skype to acquire Skype for $5 billion.
Revised: right right Online auction company eBay is in talks to acquire Voice-over-IP (VoIP) provider Skype to acquire Skype for $5 billion.
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Original: right right Online auction company eBay is in talks with Voice over IP (VoIP) provider Skype to acquire Skype for $5 billion.
Revised: right right Online auction company eBay is in talks with Voice over IP (VoIP) provider Skype for $5 billion.
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Original:  Many believe that eBay intends to enter the rapidly-expanding VoIP market and give recent entries Google and Microsoft a run for their money.
Revised:  Many believe that eBay intends to enter the rapidly-expanding VoIP market and give recent entrants Google and Microsoft a run for their money.
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Original:  Last month, Rupert Murdoch, CEO of News Corporation  was in talks with Skype to possibly buy the company.
Revised:  Last month, Rupert Murdoch, CEO of News Corporation , was in talks with Skype to possibly buy the company.
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Original: right right Online  auction company eBay is in talks to acquire Voice-over-IP (VoIP) provider Skype for  $5 billion.
Revised: right right Online auction company eBay is in talks to acquire Voice-over-IP (VoIP) provider Skype for US $5 billion.
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Original:  Many believe that eBay intends to enter the rapidly-expanding VoIP market and give recent entrants  Google and Microsoft  a run for their money.
Revised:  Many believe that eBay intends to enter the rapidly-expanding VoIP market and give recent entrants , Google and Microsoft a run for their money.
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Original:  Many believe that eBay intends to enter the rapidly-expanding VoIP market and give recent entrants  Google and Microsoft  a run for their money.
Revised:  Many believe that eBay intends to enter the rapidly-expanding VoIP market and give recent entrants Google and Microsoft , a run for their money.
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Original:  Many believe that eBay intends to enter the rapidly-expanding VoIP market and give recent entrants, Google and Microsoft, a run for their money.
Revised:  Many believe that eBay intends to enter the rapidly expanding VoIP market and give recent entrants, Google and Microsoft, a run for their money.
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Original:  It is very difficult but today I must remove this Gordian knot," and lacked team spirit.
Revised:  It is very difficult but today I must remove this Gordian knot," and lack of team spirit.
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Original:  There had been noted friction between The President and Prime Minister in recent months, largely over the country's economy and eventually led the resignation of Yushchenko's chief of staff, who cited deep corruption within the administration.
Revised:  There had been noted friction between the President and Prime Minister in recent months, largely over the country's economy and eventually led the resignation of Yushchenko's chief of staff, who cited deep corruption within the administration.
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Original:  There had been noted friction between The President and Prime Minister in recent months, largely over the country's economy and eventually led the resignation of Yushchenko's chief of staff, who cited deep corruption within the administration.
Revised:  There had been noted friction between The President and Prime Minister in recent months, largely over the country's economy . The friction ultimately led the resignation of Yushchenko's chief of staff, who cited deep corruption within the administration.
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Original:  He also claimed that he wanted to give a fresh start to an administration that he said failed to meet the high expections of supporters.
Revised:  He also claimed that he wanted to give a fresh start to an administration that he said failed to meet the high expectaions of supporters.
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Original:  He also claimed that he wanted to give a fresh start to an administration that he said failed to meet the high expectaions of supporters.
Revised:  He also claimed that he wanted to give a fresh start to an administration that he said failed to meet the high expectations of supporters.
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Original:  Amongst those dismissed was Prime Minister Yulia Tymoshenko  160px|Viktor Yushchenko Yushchenko, who won the Presidency almost one year ago, in what became known worldwide as the "Orange Revolution" had vowed to stamp out the corruption that was widespread under Leonid Kuchma.
Revised:  Amongst those dismissed was Prime Minister Yulia Tymoshenko . 160px|Viktor Yushchenko Yushchenko, who won the Presidency almost one year ago, in what became known worldwide as the "Orange Revolution" had vowed to stamp out the corruption that was widespread under Leonid Kuchma.
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Original:  Tymoshenko had a notable role within the Orange Revolution as a public speaker whose speeches brought thousands of supporters to the Yushenko camp, in a revolution that caught the world's attention.
Revised:  Tymoshenko had a notable role within the Orange Revolution as a public speaker whose speeches brought thousands of supporters to the Yushchenko camp, in a revolution that caught the world's attention.
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Original:  She was recently named the third most powerful woman in the world, behind such major political figures as U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice and Wu Yi of the People's Republic of China.
Revised:  She was recently named the third most powerful woman in the world, behind such major political figures as U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice and Wu Yi of the People's Republic of China.
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Original:  Also, several new applications and interfaces are to be introduced , dubbed "Mission Control" and "Launchpad ".
Revised:  Several new applications will be added in OS X Lion , dubbed "Mission Control" and "Launchpad ".
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Original:  Also, several new applications and interfaces are to be introduced , dubbed "Mission Control" and "Launchpad ".
Revised:  Also, several new applications and interfaces are to be introduced , dubbed "Mission Control" and "Launchpad ."
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Original:  GarageBand now includes several new piano- and guitar-playing lessons , along with new features within . iLife '11 was released on Wednesday as a US$49 upgrade, and is also available free with new Mac purchases.
Revised:  GarageBand now includes several new piano- and guitar-playing lessons . iLife '11 was released on Wednesday as a US$49 upgrade, and is also available free with new Mac purchases.
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Original: 250px|Steve Jobs, the CEO of Apple revealing the original MacBook Air . |left In a Wednesday media event, Apple Inc. released a new lineup of MacBook Air laptops and the 2011 version of the company's iLife software suite.
Revised: The new MacBook Air In a Wednesday media event, Apple Inc. released a new lineup of MacBook Air laptops and the 2011 version of the company's iLife software suite.
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Original: The new MacBook Air In a Wednesday media event, Apple Inc. released a new lineup of laptops and the 2011 version of the company's software suite.
Revised:  In a Wednesday media event, Apple Inc. released a new lineup of laptops and the 2011 version of the company's software suite.
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Original:  In the eastern South China sea oil platforms were evacuated and Asia's largest oil refiner, Sinopec Corp, has suspended some oil shipments to Hong Kong   
Revised:  In the eastern South China sea oil platforms were evacuated and Asia's largest oil refiner, Sinopec Corp, has suspended some oil shipments to Hong Kong . 
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Original:  The China oceanic administration has advised that wave heights of 5-7 meters (16-23 feet) are possible and the ministry of civil affairs and the state disaster relief commission have issued a national disaster warning.
Revised:  The China oceanic administration has advised that wave heights of 5-7 meters (16-23 feet) are possible . The ministry of civil affairs and the state disaster relief commission have issued a national disaster warning.
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Original:  In the eastern South China sea oil platforms were evacuated and Asia's largest oil refiner, Sinopec Corp, has suspended some oil shipments to Hong Kong. roght|Projected path of Megi
Revised:  In the eastern South China sea oil platforms were evacuated and Asia's largest oil refiner, Sinopec Corp, has suspended some oil shipments to Hong Kong. 
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