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Original: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill  has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company,  open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
Revised: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill , which will make Telecom unbundle the 'local loop', has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company, open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
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Original: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill  has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company,  open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
Revised: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company, open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
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Original: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill  has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company,  open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
Revised: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company, will open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
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Original: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill  has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company,  open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
Revised: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company, open its lines to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
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Original: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill  has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company,  open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
Revised: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company, open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
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Original: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill  has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company,  open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
Revised: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company, open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " , which some say will lead to equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
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Original: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill  has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company,  open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the internet sector.
Revised: The New Zealand government has announced that the Telecommunications Amendment Bill has passed in parliament only six months after it was introduced which will make Telecom unbundle the local loop . Unbundling the local loop means simply that Telecom, New Zealand's telecommunications monopoly company, open its lines up to competitors and provide "naked DSL . " It will mean that now there will be equal and fair competition in the Internet sector.
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Original:  The Honourable David Cunliffe, minister of communications, said : "We now have a clear, firm mandate from the people of New Zealand.
Revised:  The Honourable David Cunliffe, minister of communications, said that "We now have a clear, firm mandate from the people of New Zealand.
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Original:  The bill was opposed by two member of parliaments (MP) while 119 voted for the proposed changes.
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Original:  The bill equips New Zealand for the new digital age – an age where the smart use of technology will determine our continued prosperity as a country and make economic transformation a reality."
Revised:  The bill equips New Zealand for the new digital age — an age where the smart use of technology will determine our continued prosperity as a country and make economic transformation a reality."
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Original:  The bill will also enable Mr Cunliffe and the Commerce Commission the powers to split Telecom into three different division, one  for retail, business and network after public consultation.
Revised:  The bill will also enable Mr Cunliffe and the Commerce Commission the powers to split Telecom into three different division, one each for retail, business and network after public consultation.
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Original:   It will also make sure that consumers do not have to purchase a phone account when signing up for an internet accountas before the bill was passed  a NZ$10 fee was added to the bill if the phone account was not with the internet provider.
Revised:  The bill will ensure that consumers do not have to purchase a phone account when signing up for an internet accountas before the bill was passed a NZ$10 fee was added to the bill if the phone account was not with the internet provider.
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Original:   It will also make sure that consumers do not have to purchase a phone account when signing up for an internet accountas before the bill was passed  a NZ$10 fee was added to the bill if the phone account was not with the internet provider.
Revised:  It will also make sure that consumers do not have to purchase a phone account when signing up for an Internet account; before the bill was passed a NZ$10 fee was added to the bill if the phone account was not with the internet provider.
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Original:   It will also make sure that consumers do not have to purchase a phone account when signing up for an internet accountas before the bill was passed  a NZ$10 fee was added to the bill if the phone account was not with the internet provider.
Revised:  It will also make sure that consumers do not have to purchase a phone account when signing up for an internet accountas before the bill was passed , a NZ$10 fee was added to the bill if the phone account was not with the internet provider.
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Original:   It will also make sure that consumers do not have to purchase a phone account when signing up for an internet accountas before the bill was passed  a NZ$10 fee was added to the bill if the phone account was not with the internet provider.
Revised:  It will also make sure that consumers do not have to purchase a phone account when signing up for an internet accountas before the bill was passed a NZ$10 fee was added to the bill if the phone account was not with the Internet provider.
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Original:  The Telecommunications Commissioner will also be able to have more power so they can implement the changes and also monitor the implementation.
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Original:  "I welcome the fact that the telecommunications industry has already responded to the reforms in this legislation and is working collectively towards a digital future where Kiwis can realise their economic, social and cultural aspirations," Hon Cunliffe said.
Revised:  "I welcome the fact that the telecommunications industry has already responded to the reforms in this legislation and is working collectively towards a digital future where Kiwis can realize their economic, social and cultural aspirations," Hon Cunliffe said.
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Original:  The bill was opposed by two member of parliaments  while 119 voted for the proposed changes.
Revised:  The quick passing of the bill was because it was passed under urgency on the last sitting day of the year. The bill was opposed by two member of parliaments while 119 voted for the proposed changes.
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Original:  The bill will also enable Minister Cunliffe and the Commerce Commission the powers to split Telecom into three different division, one each for retail, business and network after public consultation.
Revised:  The bill will also enable Minister Cunliffe and the Commerce Commission the powers to split Telecom into the three divisions, after public consultation.
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Original:   "I welcome the fact that the telecommunications industry has already responded to the reforms in this legislation and is working collectively towards a digital future where Kiwis can realize their economic, social and cultural aspirations," Hon Cunliffe said   .
Revised:  "I welcome the fact that the telecommunications industry has already responded to the reforms in this legislation and is working collectively towards a digital future where Kiwis can realize their economic, social and cultural aspirations," Hon Cunliffe said . .
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Original:  The bill was opposed by two member of parliaments from the ACT party while 119 voted for the proposed changes.
Revised:  The bill was opposed by two members of parliament from the ACT party while 119 voted for the proposed changes.
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Original:  The quick passing of the bill was because it was passed under urgency on the last sitting day of the year.
Revised:  The bill was passed under urgency on the last sitting day of the year.
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Original:  The bill was opposed by two members of parliament from the ACT party while 119 voted for the proposed changes.
Revised:  The bill was opposed by two members of parliament from the ACT party and supported by 119 voted for the proposed changes.
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Original:  The bill was opposed by two members of parliament from the ACT party while 119 voted for the proposed changes.
Revised:  The bill was opposed by two members of parliament from the ACT party while 119 
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Original:  ACT voted against the bill as they did not want to split Telecom into three divisions .
Revised:  ACT voted against the bill to prevent a split of the company into three divisions .
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Original:  The     Honourable David Cunliffe, minister of communications, said that "We now have a clear, firm mandate from the people of New Zealand.
Revised:  The The Honourable David Cunliffe, minister of communications, said that "We now have a clear, firm mandate from the people of New Zealand.
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Original:  " The passing of the Telecommunications Amendment Bill marks the beginning of a new era." " What some people said couldn't be done is being done.
Revised:  " " What some people said couldn't be done is being done.
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Original:  " The passing of the Telecommunications Amendment Bill marks the beginning of a new era." " What some people said couldn't be done is being done.
Revised:  " The passing of the Telecommunications Amendment Bill marks the beginning of a new era." What some people said couldn't be done is being done.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Political staff at Radio New Zealand say that this is the best thing that has happened to Telecom in its 20 years operating as a private company.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  "I welcome the fact that the telecommunications industry has already responded to the reforms in this legislation and is working collectively towards a digital future where Kiwis can realize their economic, social and cultural aspirations," Hon Cunliffe said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The decision to unbundle the local loop occurred earlier this year when a mole leaked the proposal and the government had to make the announcement earlier than planned.
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Original:  Johnson  crew managed to keep Johnson on the same lap as the leaders, allowing him to gain positions.
Revised:  Johnson 's crew managed to keep Johnson on the same lap as the leaders, allowing him to gain positions.
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Original:  Kenseth, who started in the twelfth position, lead 78 laps throughout the 267-lap race. driver finished second, while finished third, ahead of and . , , , and followed in the next four positions. managed a tenth place finish.
Revised:  Kenseth, who started in the twelfth position, lead 78 laps of the 267-lap race. driver finished second, while finished third, ahead of and . , , , and followed in the next four positions. managed a tenth place finish.
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Original:  Kenseth, who started in the twelfth position, lead 78 laps of the 267-lap race. driver finished second, while finished third, ahead of and . , , , and followed in the next four positions. managed a tenth place finish.
Revised:  Kenseth, who started in the twelfth position, led 78 laps of the 267-lap race. driver finished second, while finished third, ahead of and . , , , and followed in the next four positions. managed a tenth place finish.
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Original: driver won his third race of the season and the second of the 2012 Chase for the Sprint Cup following the in on Sunday.
Revised: driver won his third race of the season and the second of the 2012 following the in on Sunday.
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Original:  Stewart, Gordon, Kenseth, and Harvick round out the top-ten positions for the Drivers' Championship with four races remaining in the season.
Revised:  Stewart, Gordon, Kenseth, and round out the top-ten positions for the Drivers' Championship with four races remaining in the season.
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Original:  Under the 17th amendment to the U.S. Constitution, state legislatures can give their governor , Mike Rounds, the power to appoint someone else to take over, but this power can only be used in cases where the senator vacancies his seat.
Revised:  Under the 17th amendment to the U.S. Constitution, state legislatures can give their governor the power to appoint someone else to take over, but this power can only be used in cases where the senator vacancies his seat.
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Original:  Should Johnson die or resign the governor will likely appoint a Republican in his place.
Revised:  Should Johnson die or resign the governor will likely appoint a Republican in Johnson's place.
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Original:  however, he was transported to George Washington University Hospital by ambulance, where he is still recieving treatment.
Revised:  however, he was transported to George Washington University Hospital by ambulance, where he is still receiving treatment.
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Original:  Under the 17th amendment to the U.S. Constitution, state legislatures can give their governor the power to appoint someone else to take over, but this power can only be used in cases where the senator vacancies his seat.
Revised:  Under the 17th Amendment to the U.S. Constitution, state legislatures can give their governor the power to appoint someone else to take over, but this power can only be used in cases where the senator vacancies his seat.
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Original:  Under the 17th amendment to the U.S. Constitution, state legislatures can give their governor the power to appoint someone else to take over, but this power can only be used in cases where the senator vacancies his seat.
Revised:  Under the 17th amendment to the U.S. Constitution, state legislatures can give their governor the power to appoint someone else to take over, but this power can only be used in cases where the senator vacates his seat.
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Original:  Historicially, this extended to death or resignation, but serious illness does not count.
Revised:  Historically, this applies to death or resignation, but serious illness does not count.
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Original:  Should Johnson die or resign  the Republican governor, Mike Rounds, will likely appoint a Republican in Johnson's place.
Revised:  Should Johnson die or resign , the Republican governor, Mike Rounds, will likely appoint a Republican in Johnson's place.
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Original:  He us currently "recovering without complications" but it still being monitored.
Revised:  He is currently "recovering without complications" but it still being monitored.
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Original:  This appointment would last until the end of Johnson's term, in 2008 
Revised:  This appointment would last until the end of Johnson's term, in 2008. 
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Original:  The only way for this to happen is to open the constitution, however, Harper's plan would bypass the need for constitutional change.
Revised:  The only way for this to happen is to amend the constitution, however, Harper's plan would bypass the need for constitutional change.
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Original: Traditionaly , the Prime Minister is the one who picks who should be in the senate, who can serve until they are 75.
Revised: Traditionally , the Prime Minister is the one who picks who should be in the senate, who can serve until they are 75.
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Original: For the first time ever  Canadian Prime Minister  Stephen Harper has proposed a bill that says Canadians will elect the Senate of Canada.
Revised: For the first time ever , Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper has proposed a bill that says Canadians will elect the Senate of Canada.
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Original: For the first time ever  Canadian Prime Minister  Stephen Harper has proposed a bill that says Canadians will elect the Senate of Canada.
Revised: For the first time ever Canadian Prime Minister , Stephen Harper has proposed a bill that says Canadians will elect the Senate of Canada.
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Original:  Traditionally, the Prime Minister is the one who picks who should be in the senate , who can serve until they are 75.
Revised:  Traditionally, the Prime Minister is the one who picks who should be in the Senate , who can serve until they are 75.
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Original: For the first time ever, Canadian Prime Minister, Stephen Harper has proposed a bill that says Canadians will elect the Senate of Canada.
Revised:  Canadian Prime Minister, Stephen Harper has proposed a bill that says Canadians will elect the Senate of Canada.
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Original:  The only way for this to happen is to amend the constitution, however,  Harper's plan would bypass the need for constitutional change.
Revised:  The only way for this to happen is to amend the constitution, however, Harper's proposal bypasses the need for constitutional change.
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Original:  Senators would campaign like any other politician in Canada .
Revised:  Senators would campaign like any other politician .
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Original:  The only provinces that actually have senate elections are Alberta and British Columbia.
Revised:  The only provinces that actually has had Senate elections are Alberta and British Columbia.
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Original:  On a warm summer morning in 1942 while serving on the USS Rapaden, a tanker, exploded.
Revised:  On a warm summer morning in 1942 while serving on the tanker USS Rapaden exploded.
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Original:  Three years ago he was told even with the advances of medical technology he would nott be able regain his vision in his right eye.
Revised:  Three years ago he was told even with the advances of medical technology he would not be able regain his vision in his right eye.
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Original: The saga of Don Karkosbegins one day after the attack on Pearl Harbor when he enlisted in the navy.
Revised: Don Karkos's problems began one day after the attack on Pearl Harbor when he enlisted in the navy.
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Original:  On a warm summer morning in 1942 while serving on the tanker  USS Rapaden exploded.
Revised:  On a warm summer morning in 1942 while serving on the tanker , USS Rapaden exploded.
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Original:  On a warm summer morning in 1942 while serving on the tanker, USS Rapaden  exploded.
Revised:  On a warm summer morning in 1942 while serving on the tanker, USS Rapaden , it exploded.
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Original:  Metal from the explosion hit Don Karkos above his right eye  cutting open his head.
Revised:  Metal from the explosion hit Don Karkos above his right eye , cutting open his head.
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Original:  Due to the lost of his peripheral vision he kept banging in to walls and even people.
Revised:  Due to the lost of his peripheral vision he kept banging into walls and even people.
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Original:  That evening while rubbing his good eye, he noticed something strange.
Revised:  That evening while rubbing his good eye, he 
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Original:  He realized he could once again see through the eye.
Revised:  realized he could once again see through the eye.
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Original: Don Karkos 's problems began one day after the attack on Pearl Harbor when he enlisted in the navy.
Revised: Don Karkos lost his sight one day after the attack on Pearl Harbor when he enlisted in the navy.
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