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Original:  A resolution was passed by all 30 members at their general meeting to reject the Federal governments plan
Revised:  A resolution was passed by all 30 members at their general meeting to reject the Federal government's plan
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Original:  Most passengers were sleeping below deck when the ship was lost near the island of . SCP was convicted of charges concerning the vessel's seaworthiness by the jury, which sat in Tonga's parliament building after the trial's high profile saw it moved away from Nuku'alofa Supreme Court  
Revised:  Most passengers were sleeping below deck when the ship was lost near the island of . SCP was convicted of charges concerning the vessel's seaworthiness by the jury, which sat in Tonga's parliament building after the trial's high profile saw it moved away from Nuku'alofa Supreme Court . 
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Original: Tonga's largest criminal trial has today ended in the conviction of four men and the state shipping firm over the sinking of . 74 were killed when the ferry went down off in 2009.
Revised: Tonga's largest criminal trial today ended in the conviction of four men and the state shipping firm over the sinking of . 74 were killed when the ferry went down off in 2009.
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Original:  The Shipping Corporation of Polynesia (SCP) ' manager John Jonesse, acting director of the national department for ports and marine affairs, captain Viliami Makahokovalu Tuputupu, and first mate Semisi Pomale were all convicted of her by negligence.
Revised:  The Shipping Corporation of Polynesia (SCP) manager John Jonesse, acting director of the national department for ports and marine affairs, captain Viliami Makahokovalu Tuputupu, and first mate Semisi Pomale were all convicted of her by negligence.
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Original:  The Shipping Corporation of Polynesia (SCP) ' manager John Jonesse, acting director of the national department for ports and marine affairs, captain Viliami Makahokovalu Tuputupu, and first mate Semisi Pomale were all convicted of her by negligence.
Revised:  The Shipping Corporation of Polynesia (SCP) ' manager John Jonesse, acting director of the national department for ports and marine affairs, captain Viliami Makahokovalu Tuputupu, and first mate Semisi Pomale were all convicted of by negligence.
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Original:  When SCP bought it in 2009 from Fiji its suffered from "huge" rusting holes and on August 5 that year sank in deep water during a storm.
Revised:  When SCP bought it in 2009 from Fiji , it suffered from "huge" rusting holes and on August 5 that year sank in deep water during a storm.
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Original:  The men were remanded into custody over the weekend to await sentencing;
Revised:  The men were remanded into custody to await sentencing;
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Original: Built in 1970 , by 1985 the ferry was found to be unseaworthy and hence not suited for use in deep water.
Revised: Built in the early 1970s , by 1985 the ferry was found to be unseaworthy and hence not suited for use in deep water.
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Original:  The Shipping Corporation of Polynesia (SCP) manager John Jonesse, acting director of the national department for ports and marine affairs Viliami Tu'ipulotu, captain Viliami Makahokovalu Tuputupu, and first mate Semisi Pomale were all convicted of  by negligence.
Revised:  The Shipping Corporation of Polynesia (SCP) manager John Jonesse, acting director of the national department for ports and marine affairs Viliami Tu'ipulotu, captain Viliami Makahokovalu Tuputupu, and first mate Semisi Pomale were all convicted of her by negligence.
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Original: 225px|Knut at his debut at the Berlin Zoo in 2007 Two weeks after , the celebrity , died unexpectedly, an report shows that although the immediate cause of death was , Knut was suffering from a that caused a , leading to his fall into the pool in his enclosure at the zoo .
Revised: 225px|Knut at his debut at the Berlin Zoo in 2007 Two weeks after the celebrity died unexpectedly, an report shows that although the immediate cause of death was , Knut was suffering from a that caused a , leading to his fall into the pool in his enclosure at the zoo .
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Original: 225px|Knut at his debut at the Berlin Zoo in 2007 Two weeks after , the celebrity , died unexpectedly, an report shows that although the immediate cause of death was , Knut was suffering from a that caused a , leading to his fall into the pool in his enclosure at the zoo .
Revised: 225px|Knut at his debut at the Berlin Zoo in 2007 Two weeks after , the celebrity , died unexpectedly, an report shows that the immediate cause of death was , Knut was suffering from a that caused a , leading to his fall into the pool in his enclosure at the zoo .
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Original: 225px|Knut at his debut at the Berlin Zoo in 2007 Two weeks after , the celebrity , died unexpectedly, an report shows that although the immediate cause of death was , Knut was suffering from a that caused a , leading to his fall into the pool in his enclosure at the zoo .
Revised: 225px|Knut at his debut at the Berlin Zoo in 2007 Two weeks after , the celebrity , died unexpectedly, an report shows that although the immediate cause of death was , Knut was suffering from a resulting in a that led to his fall into the pool in his enclosure at the zoo .
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Original:  Ruled out during the autopsy were non-viral causes of encephalitis such and also ruled out .
Revised:  Ruled out during the autopsy were non-viral causes of encephalitis such or a .
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Original:  Ruled out during the autopsy were non-viral causes of encephalitis such  or a .
Revised:  Ruled out during the autopsy were non-viral causes of encephalitis such as or a .
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Original:  Ruled out during the autopsy were non-viral causes of encephalitis such as or a .
Revised:  Ruled out during the autopsy were other causes of encephalitis such as or a .
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Original:  Ruled out during the autopsy were other causes of encephalitis such as or a .
Revised:  Ruled out during the autopsy were causes of encephalitis such as or a .
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Original: Britain's Daily Sport newspaper and its sister publication, the more commonly known Sunday Sport , have ceased publication in the UK effective Friday.
Revised: Britain's newspaper and its sister publication, the more commonly known Sunday Sport , have ceased publication in the UK effective Friday.
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Original:  Rescued from collapse by former owner David Sullivan in 2009, The Daily Sport, first published in 1991, followed on from the Sunday Sport, first published in 1986, which became known for its use of unbelievable and most often untrue headlines, and the more than gratuitous use of Page 3 girls throughout the newspaper.
Revised:  Rescued from collapse by former owner in 2009, The Daily Sport, first published in 1991, followed on from the Sunday Sport, first published in 1986, which became known for its use of unbelievable and most often untrue headlines, and the more than gratuitous use of Page 3 girls throughout the newspaper.
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Original: Britain's newspaper and its sister publication , the more commonly known , have ceased publication in the UK effective Friday.
Revised: Britain's newspaper and its sister title , the more commonly known , have ceased publication in the UK effective Friday.
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Original:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London Bus and a World War II bomber had been found on the moon, for most of their existance, the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were seen as a laughing stock among newspapers.
Revised:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London Bus and a World War II bomber being found on the moon, for most of their existance, the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were seen as a laughing stock among newspapers.
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Original:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London bus being found in Antarctica and a World War II bomber being found on the moon, for most of their existance , the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were  seen as a laughing stock among newspapers .
Revised:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London bus being found in Antarctica and a World War II bomber being found on the moon, for most of their exist3nce , the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were seen as a laughing stock among newspapers .
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Original:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London bus being found in Antarctica and a World War II bomber being found on the moon, for most of their existance , the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were  seen as a laughing stock among newspapers .
Revised:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London bus being found in Antarctica and a World War II bomber being found on the moon, for most of their existance , the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were not seen as a laughing stock among newspapers .
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Original:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London bus being found in Antarctica and a World War II bomber being found on the moon, for most of their existance , the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were  seen as a laughing stock among newspapers .
Revised:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London bus being found in Antarctica and a World War II bomber being found on the moon, for most of their existance , the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were seen as a particularly reliable news outlets .
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Original:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London bus being found in Antarctica and a World War II bomber being found on the moon, for most of their exist3nce , the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were not seen as a particularly reliable news outlets.
Revised:  With headlines claiming such strange things as a London bus being found in Antarctica and a World War II bomber being found on the moon, for most of their existence , the Daily Sport and the Sunday Sport were not seen as a particularly reliable news outlets.
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Original: 150px|left An Afghan mob attacked a United Nations compound Friday, killing as many as 7 UN workers and setting fire to the compound.
Revised: 150px|left An Afghan mob attacked a United Nations compound Friday, killing at least seven UN workers and setting fire to the compound.
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Original:  The attack occurred after several hours of protests over the burning of a by a Florida pastor that was broadcast on line .
Revised:  The attack occurred after several hours of protests over the burning of a by a Florida pastor .
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Original:  The UN is still  the process of determining the exact death toll and the extent of the damage.
Revised:  The UN is still in the process of determining the exact death toll and the extent of the damage.
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Original: 150px|left An Afghan mob attacked a United Nations compound Friday, killing at least seven UN workers and setting fire to the compound.
Revised: 150px|left An Afghan mob attacked a United Nations compound Friday, killing seven UN workers and setting fire to the compound.
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Original:  The attack occurred after several hours of peaceful protests broadcast on line over the burning of a by a Florida pastor.
Revised:  The attack occurred after several hours of peaceful protests , broadcast online, over the burning of a by a Florida pastor.
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Original:  Friday's attack occurred after several hours of protests by approximately 2000 demonstrators in front of the UN compound in Mazar-e-Sharif that was broadcast on line . Demonstrators began to throw stones, tried to climb the compound walls, and then overwhelmed the UN guards positioned outside the compound, taking their weapons and shooting at Afghan police.
Revised:  Friday's attack occurred after several hours of protests by approximately 2000 demonstrators in front of the UN compound in Mazar-e-Sharif that was broadcast online . Demonstrators began to throw stones, tried to climb the compound walls, and then overwhelmed the UN guards positioned outside the compound, taking their weapons and shooting at Afghan police.
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Original: The wife of one of the passengers received a text message from her husband saying, " p%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% lane going down.
Revised:  p%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% lane going down.
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Original: The wife of one of the passengers received a text message from her husband saying, " p%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% lane going down.
Revised: The wife of one of the passengers received a text message from her husband saying, " %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% lane going down.
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Original:  There was a hold in the fuselage about three feet long.
Revised:  There was a hole in the fuselage about three feet long.
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Original: A flight carrying 118 passengers between Phoenix, Arizona and was forced to divert to the Yuma Marine Corps Air Station in Arizona, after a hole was discovered in the top of the aircraft;
Revised:  carrying 118 passengers between Phoenix, Arizona and was forced to divert to the Yuma Marine Corps Air Station in Arizona, after a hole was discovered in the top of the aircraft;
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Original: carrying 118 passengers between Phoenix, Arizona and , California was forced to divert to the Yuma Marine Corps Air Station in Arizona, after a hole was discovered in the top of the aircraft;
Revised: carrying 118 passengers between Phoenix, Arizona and , California was forced to divert to the Yuma Marine Corps Air Station in Arizona, after a hole appeared in the top of the aircraft;
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Original: There have been unconfirmed reports of a bomb scare at Circular Quay in central Sydney, Australia .
Revised: There have been reports of a bomb scare at Circular Quay in central Sydney, Australia .
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Original:  People are being evacuated from Circular Quay, Town Hall Station, and presumably other stations  
Revised:  People are being evacuated from Circular Quay, Town Hall Station, and presumably other stations . 
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Original:  The Deputy Police Commissioner has appealed for calm, and says that if any credible threats had been received the public would be kept informed and they would be dealt with appropriately  
Revised:  The Deputy Police Commissioner has appealed for calm, and says that if any credible threats had been received the public would be kept informed and they would be dealt with appropriately . 
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Original:  People are being evacuated from Circular Quay, Town Hall Station , and presumably other stations . Police media have confirmed that a number of bomb threats were received, including one by email , however states that there have been no evacuations.
Revised:  People are being evacuated from Circular Quay, Town Hall Station . Police media have confirmed that a number of bomb threats were received, including one by email , however states that there have been no evacuations.
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Original:  People are being evacuated from Circular Quay, Town Hall Station , and presumably other stations . Police media have confirmed that a number of bomb threats were received, including one by email , however states that there have been no evacuations.
Revised:  People are being evacuated from Circular Quay, Town Hall Station , and presumably other stations . Police media have confirmed that a number of bomb threats were received, including one by email . They state that there have been no evacuations.
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Original:  The Deputy Police Commissioner has  appealed for calm, and says that if any credible threats had been receivedthe public would be kept informed and they would be dealt with appropriately .
Revised:  The Deputy Police Commissioner has appealed for calm, and says that if any credible threats are received, the public will be kept informed and they would be dealt with appropriately .
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Original:  The Deputy Police Commissioner has  appealed for calm, and says that if any credible threats had been receivedthe public would be kept informed and they would be dealt with appropriately .
Revised:  The Deputy Police Commissioner has appealed for calm, and says that if any credible threats had been receivedthe public would be kept informed and dealt with appropriately .
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Original:  The Deputy Police Commissioner has  appealed for calm, and says that if any credible threats had been receivedthe public would be kept informed and they would be dealt with appropriately .
Revised:  The Deputy Police Commissioner has appealed for calm, and says that if any credible threats had been receivedthe public would be kept informed and they would be dealt with appropriately 
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Original:  The Deupty Commisioner has said that the threats were "nothing more than a hoax.
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Original: There have been reports of a bomb scare at Circular Quay in central Sydney, Australia, and unconfirmed reports of evacuations at Town Hall Station.
Revised: There have been reports of a bomb 
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Original: Time magazine named 14-year-old Ahmed Mohamed on Tuesday to its list of 'Most Influential Teens of 2015'.
Revised:  magazine named 14-year-old Ahmed Mohamed on Tuesday to its list of 'Most Influential Teens of 2015'.
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Original: Time magazine named 14-year-old Ahmed Mohamed on Tuesday to its list of 'Most Influential Teens of 2015'.
Revised: Time magazine named 14-year-old on Tuesday to its list of 'Most Influential Teens of 2015'.
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Original:  He was made famous after being taken into custody by police when a teacher mistakenly thought a clock he brought to his Texas school looked like a bomb.
Revised:  He was made famous after being taken into custody by police when a teacher thought a clock he brought to his Texas school looked like a bomb.
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Original: magazine named 14-year-old yesterday to its list of ' Most Influential Teens of 2015 ' . He was made famous after being taken into custody by police when a teacher thought a clock he brought to his Texas school looked like a bomb.
Revised: magazine named 14-year-old yesterday to its list of " Most Influential Teens of 2015 ' . He was made famous after being taken into custody by police when a teacher thought a clock he brought to his Texas school looked like a bomb.
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Original: magazine named 14-year-old yesterday to its list of ' Most Influential Teens of 2015 ' . He was made famous after being taken into custody by police when a teacher thought a clock he brought to his Texas school looked like a bomb.
Revised: magazine named 14-year-old yesterday to its list of ' Most Influential Teens of 2015 " . He was made famous after being taken into custody by police when a teacher thought a clock he brought to his Texas school looked like a bomb.
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Original:  But the ninth-grader ’ s arrest, after teachers and authorities mistook said clock for a bomb, kicked off a national debate over racial profiling".
Revised:  But the ninth-grader ' s arrest, after teachers and authorities mistook said clock for a bomb, kicked off a national debate over racial profiling".
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Original: Mohamed traveled to the earlier last week where he met with US President Barack Obama.
Revised: Mohamed traveled to the last week where he met with US President Barack Obama.
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Original:  magazine named 14-year-old yesterday to its list of "30 Most Influential Teens of 2015".
Revised: Time magazine named 14-year-old yesterday to its list of "30 Most Influential Teens of 2015".
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Original:  Mohamed joins the ranks of influential teens including US President Barack Obama's daughter Malia Obama, and winner . Mohamed traveled to the  last week where he met with US President Barack Obama.
Revised:  Mohamed joins the ranks of influential teens including US President Barack Obama's daughter Malia Obama, and winner . Mohamed traveled to the White House last week where he met with US President Barack Obama.
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Original:  The ban has come after the Bosnian Football Federation (NSBIH) rejected a demand from FIFA to change it's three-man presidency to a single president.
Revised:  The ban comes after the Bosnian Football Federation (NSBIH) rejected a demand from FIFA to change it's three-man presidency to a single president.
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Original:  The ban has come after the Bosnian Football Federation (NSBIH) rejected a demand from FIFA to change it's three-man presidency to a single president.
Revised:  The ban has come after the Bosnian Football Federation (NSBIH) rejected a demand from FIFA to change its three-man presidency to a single president.
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Original:  The change was rejected during a NSBIH meeting on Wednesday forcing FIFA and Europeon football governing body UFEA to make the decision to suspend the federation.
Revised:  The change was rejected during a NSBIH meeting on Wednesday , causing FIFA and Europeon football governing body UFEA to make the decision to suspend the federation.
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Original:  FIFA and UFEA said in a statement that " The  NFSBIH representative and club teams are no longer entitled to take part in international competitions as of 1 April 2011 and until the aforementioned problem is solved.
Revised:  FIFA and UFEA said in a statement that " t NFSBIH representative and club teams are no longer entitled to take part in international competitions as of 1 April 2011 and until the aforementioned problem is solved.
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Original:  FIFA and UFEA said in a statement that " The  NFSBIH representative and club teams are no longer entitled to take part in international competitions as of 1 April 2011 and until the aforementioned problem is solved.
Revised:  FIFA and UFEA said in a statement that " The he NFSBIH representative and club teams are no longer entitled to take part in international competitions as of 1 April 2011 and until the aforementioned problem is solved.
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Original:  National manager of the Bosnia and Herzegovina  , Safet Susic  has spoke out against FIFA's ruling  blaming political reasons  why the demand was not meet.
Revised:  National manager of the Bosnia and Herzegovina team , Safet Susic has spoke out against FIFA's ruling blaming political reasons why the demand was not meet.
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Original:  National manager of the Bosnia and Herzegovina  , Safet Susic  has spoke out against FIFA's ruling  blaming political reasons  why the demand was not meet.
Revised:  National manager of the Bosnia and Herzegovina , Safet Susic , has spoke out against FIFA's ruling blaming political reasons why the demand was not meet.
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Original:  National manager of the Bosnia and Herzegovina  , Safet Susic  has spoke out against FIFA's ruling  blaming political reasons  why the demand was not meet.
Revised:  National manager of the Bosnia and Herzegovina , Safet Susic has spoke out against FIFA's ruling , blaming political reasons why the demand was not meet.
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Original:  National manager of the Bosnia and Herzegovina  , Safet Susic  has spoke out against FIFA's ruling  blaming political reasons  why the demand was not meet.
Revised:  National manager of the Bosnia and Herzegovina , Safet Susic has spoke out against FIFA's ruling blaming political reasons for why the demand was not meet.
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Original:  He said  " There  is absolutely no chance that the NFSBIH might find a way out of the present deadlock and get the job done.
Revised:  He said that " There is absolutely no chance that the NFSBIH might find a way out of the present deadlock and get the job done.
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Original:  He said  " There  is absolutely no chance that the NFSBIH might find a way out of the present deadlock and get the job done.
Revised:  He said " t is absolutely no chance that the NFSBIH might find a way out of the present deadlock and get the job done.
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