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Original:  Today's deal ended the so-called European–Chinese 'bra wars' , which have split the EU member states: those with a strong retail sector supported the agreement, while those with large clothing industries wanted to set up  protectionist policy against China.
Revised:  Today's deal ended the so-called European–Chinese 'bra wars' , which have split the EU member states: those with a strong retail sector support the agreement, while those with large clothing industries wanted to set up protectionist policy against China.
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Original:  Today's deal ended the so-called European–Chinese 'bra wars' , which have split the EU member states: those with a strong retail sector supported the agreement, while those with large clothing industries wanted to set up  protectionist policy against China.
Revised:  Today's deal ended the so-called European–Chinese 'bra wars' , which have split the EU member states: those with a strong retail sector supported the agreement, while those with large clothing industries want to set up protectionist policy against China.
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Original:  Today's deal ended the so-called European–Chinese 'bra wars' , which have split the EU member states: those with a strong retail sector supported the agreement, while those with large clothing industries wanted to set up  protectionist policy against China.
Revised:  Today's deal ended the so-called European–Chinese 'bra wars' , which have split the EU member states: those with a strong retail sector supported the agreement, while those with large clothing industries wanted to set up a protectionist policy against China.
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Original:  SAVE WOMEN'S LIVES PASS THE RH Bill NOW!"|Carlos Celdran being interviewed on-camera at a pro-Reproductive Health Bill rally at the Philippine Congress in November , 2009 Popular Filipino social commentator and tour guide Carlos Celdran staged a protest action in Manila, Philippines against church opposition to the Reproductive Health Bill.
Revised:  SAVE WOMEN'S LIVES PASS THE RH Bill NOW!"|Carlos Celdran being interviewed on-camera at a pro-Reproductive Health Bill rally at the Philippine Congress in November 2009 Popular Filipino social commentator and tour guide Carlos Celdran staged a protest action in Manila, Philippines against church opposition to the Reproductive Health Bill.
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Original:  Dressed as Jose Rizal, Celdran  entered Manila Cathedral during a mass with Manila Mayor Alfredo Lim, Manila Archbishop Gaudencio Cardinal Rosales, the Papal Nuncio Archbishop Edward Adams, and other Catholic bishops present, standing before the altar with a sign bearing the word "Damaso" -- a reference to the villainous, power-wielding Spanish friar from Rizal's novel Noli Me Tangere, which touches on the abuses of the Catholic Church during the 19th century  .
Revised:  Dressed as Jose Rizal, Celdran entered Manila Cathedral during a mass with Manila Mayor Alfredo Lim, Manila Archbishop Gaudencio Cardinal Rosales, the Papal Nuncio Archbishop Edward Adams, and other Catholic bishops present, standing before the altar with a sign bearing the word "Damaso" -- a reference to the villainous, power-wielding Spanish friar from Rizal's novel Noli Me Tangere, who represents the abuses of the Catholic Church during the 19th century .
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Original:  Dressed as Jose Rizal, Celdran  entered Manila Cathedral during a mass with Manila Mayor Alfredo Lim, Manila Archbishop Gaudencio Cardinal Rosales, the Papal Nuncio Archbishop Edward Adams, and other Catholic bishops present, standing before the altar with a sign bearing the word "Damaso" -- a reference to the villainous, power-wielding Spanish friar from Rizal's novel Noli Me Tangere, which touches on the abuses of the Catholic Church during the 19th century  .
Revised:  Dressed as Jose Rizal, Celdran entered Manila Cathedral during a mass with Manila Mayor Alfredo Lim, Manila Archbishop Gaudencio Cardinal Rosales, the Papal Nuncio Archbishop Edward Adams, and other Catholic bishops present, standing before the altar with a sign bearing the word "Damaso" -- a reference to the villainous, power-wielding Spanish friar from Rizal's novel Noli Me Tangere, which touches on the abuses of the Catholic Church during the 19th century Spanish occupation of the Philippines .
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Original:  It appears that this action was part of a larger program of protest, as the previous day he had invited his Facebook friends to a flash mob photo opportunity in front of the Catholic Bishop's Conference of the Philippines taking place October 1, where he reported he would be wearing a bishop's costume         
Revised:  It appears that this action was part of a larger program of protest, as the previous day he had invited his Facebook friends to a flash mob photo opportunity in front of the Catholic Bishop's Conference of the Philippines taking place October 1, where he reported he would be wearing a bishop's costume . 
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Original: Celdran was freed almost a day later on 6,000-peso (  $138) bail.
Revised: Celdran was freed almost a day later on 6,000-peso ( US $138) bail.
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Original:  Almost 20 years to the day after their last premiership - they the 1990 premiership on October 6 that year - Collingwood defeated St Kilda 16-12 108 to 7-10 52 
Revised:  Almost 20 years to the day after their last premiership - they the 1990 premiership on October 6 that year - Collingwood defeated St Kilda 16-12 108 to 7-10 52. 
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Original:  They kicked six goals and two behinds in the second half but Collingwood continued to extend their lead, kicking ten goals and six behinds for the half    
Revised:  They kicked six goals and two behinds in the second half but Collingwood continued to extend their lead, kicking ten goals and six behinds for the half . 
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Original:  They defeated Geelong by four points in Qualifying Final then the Western Bulldogs by 24 points in the Preliminary Final  
Revised:  They defeated Geelong by four points in Qualifying Final then the Western Bulldogs by 24 points in the Preliminary Final . 
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Original:  Under the AFL 's current rules, a drawn Grand Final is replayed the next week, while games played during the proceeding three weeks go to extra time and teams get two premirership points each.
Revised:  Under the 's current rules, a drawn Grand Final is replayed the next week, while games played during the proceeding three weeks go to extra time and teams get two premirership points each.
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Original:  They defeated Western Bulldogs by 62 points in the Qualifying Final then Geelong by 41 points in the Preliminary Final .
Revised:  They defeated by 62 points in the Qualifying Final then Geelong by 41 points in the Preliminary Final .
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Original:  They defeated Western Bulldogs by 62 points in the Qualifying Final then Geelong by 41 points in the Preliminary Final .
Revised:  They defeated Western Bulldogs by 62 points in the then by 41 points in the Preliminary Final .
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Original:  They defeated Western Bulldogs by 62 points in the Qualifying Final then Geelong by 41 points in the Preliminary Final .
Revised:  They defeated Western Bulldogs by 62 points in the Qualifying Final then Geelong by 41 points in the .
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Original:  They defeated Geelong by four points in Qualifying Final then the Western Bulldogs by 24 points in the Preliminary Final .
Revised:  They defeated Geelong by four points in then the Western Bulldogs by 24 points in the Preliminary Final .
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Original:  They defeated Geelong by four points in Qualifying Final then the Western Bulldogs by 24 points in the Preliminary Final .
Revised:  They defeated Geelong by four points in Qualifying Final then the Western Bulldogs by 24 points in the .
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Original:  Their have been previous crashes in the area with one taking place earlier this year in February when a Cessna 206 crashed killing all 7 occupants, this flight was also operated by Nazca Airlines. . There was also a crash in April 2008 where 5 French tourists were killed, but the pilot survived
Revised:  Their have been previous crashes in the area with one taking place earlier this year in February when a Cessna 206 crashed killing all 7 occupants, this flight was also operated by Nazca Airlines. There was also a crash in April 2008 where 5 French tourists were killed, but the pilot survived
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Original: The Nazaca monkey A small Cessna passenger plane crashed shortly after takeoff in Peru, near the Nazca Lines on Saturday leaving all 6 occupants dead according to local authorities.
Revised: The Nazca monkey A small Cessna passenger plane crashed shortly after takeoff in Peru, near the Nazca Lines on Saturday leaving all 6 occupants dead according to local authorities.
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Original: The Nazaca monkey A small Cessna passenger plane crashed shortly after takeoff in Peru, near the Nazca Lines on Saturday leaving all 6 occupants dead according to local authorities.
Revised: The Nazaca monkey A small Cessna passenger plane crashed shortly after takeoff in Peru, near the Nazca Lines on Saturday leaving all six occupants dead according to local authorities.
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Original:  The victims of the crash were 4 British citizens, three men and one woman , and the Peruvian pilot and co-pilot.
Revised:  The victims of the crash were three men and one woman , and the Peruvian pilot and co-pilot.
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Original:  According to the Associated Press the Nazca police chief  the cause of the accident seems to be engine failure.
Revised:  According to the Associated Press the Nazca police chief claims the cause of the accident seems to be engine failure.
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Original:  The Associated Press has also reported that the British embassy refused to comment without permission from London.
Revised:  The Associated Press has also reported that the British refused to comment without permission from London.
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Original:  Their have been previous crashes in the area with one taking place earlier this year in February when a Cessna 206 crashed killing all 7 occupants, this flight was also operated by Nazca Airlines.
Revised:  There have been previous crashes in the area with one taking place earlier this year in February when a Cessna 206 crashed killing all 7 occupants, this flight was also operated by Nazca Airlines.
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Original:  Their have been previous crashes in the area with one taking place earlier this year in February when a Cessna 206 crashed killing all 7 occupants, this flight was also operated by Nazca Airlines.
Revised:  Their have been previous crashes in the area with one taking place in February when a Cessna 206 crashed killing all 7 occupants, this flight was also operated by Nazca Airlines.
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Original:  Their have been previous crashes in the area with one taking place earlier this year in February when a Cessna 206 crashed killing all 7 occupants, this flight was also operated by Nazca Airlines.
Revised:  Their have been previous crashes in the area with one taking place earlier this year in February when a Cessna 206 crashed killing all seven occupants; that flight was also operated by Nazca Airlines.
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Original:  There was also a crash in April 2008 where 5 French touristswere killed , but the pilot survived
Revised:  A crash in April 2008 where 5 French touristswere killed , but the pilot survived
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Original:  There was also a crash in April 2008 where 5 French touristswere killed , but the pilot survived
Revised:  There was also a crash in April 2008 killed five French tourists , but the pilot survived
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Original:  The plane is believed to belong to Nazca airlines .
Revised:  The plane is believed to belong to Nazca Airlines .
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Original:  Included in these threats is the demand that the universities increase their admissions to the medical schoolsthey are part of.
Revised:  Included in these threats is the demand that the universities increase their admissions to their medical schools.
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Original:  Police have said that the letters all appear to come from the same source but they have not released the actual letters as of yet.
Revised:  Police have said that the letters all appear to come from the same source but they have not released the actual letters yet.
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Original:  In one unconfirmed report from a police source it is said that unless they double the admission rate this year that next year there will be a large scale terrorist attack
Revised:  An unconfirmed report from a police source it is said that unless they double the admission rate this year that next year there will be a large scale terrorist attack
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Original:  In one unconfirmed report from a police source it is said that unless they double the admission rate this year that next year there will be a large scale terrorist attack
Revised:  In one unconfirmed report from a police source it is said that unless they double the admission rate this year , next year there will be a large scale terrorist attack
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Original:  Police have said that the letters all appear to come from the same source but they have not released the actual letters yet.
Revised:  Police said that the letters all appear to come from the same source but they have not released the actual letters yet.
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Original:  An unconfirmed report from a police source says that the letters state that unless they double the admission rate this year, next year there will be a large scale terrorist attack
Revised:  An unconfirmed report from a police source says the letters state that unless they double the admission rate this year, next year there will be a large scale terrorist attack
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Original:  Security has been increased at the Keio University Hospital .
Revised:  The Tokyo Metropolitan Police Department is investigating, but nothing suspicious has been found at the hospitals .
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Original: In , on Sunday, beat the 1-0 in the Cascadia Cup battle. notched his fourth shutout this season while scored the winning goal in the 77th minute with an assist from .
Revised: In , on Sunday, beat the 1-0 in the battle. notched his fourth shutout this season while scored the winning goal in the 77th minute with an assist from .
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Original: In , on Sunday, beat the 1-0 in the battle. notched his fourth shutout this season while scored the winning goal in the 77th minute with an assist from .
Revised: In , on Sunday, beat the 1–0 in the battle. notched his fourth shutout this season while scored the winning goal in the 77th minute with an assist from .
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Original:  Seattle is now 1-0 in the cup while Portland falls to 0-2. almost scored minutes later when sub rattled the crossbar in the 81st minute.
Revised:  Seattle is now 1–0 in the cup while Portland falls to 0-2. almost scored minutes later when sub rattled the crossbar in the 81st minute.
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Original:  Seattle is now 1-0 in the cup while Portland falls to 0-2. almost scored minutes later when sub rattled the crossbar in the 81st minute.
Revised:  Seattle is now 1-0 in the cup while Portland falls to 0–2. almost scored minutes later when sub rattled the crossbar in the 81st minute.
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Original:  The Timbers also led the Sounders in shots with 11-10.
Revised:  The Timbers also led the Sounders in shots with 11–10.
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Original:  Portland hosts the next weekend and Seattle will travel to face
Revised:  Portland hosts the next weekend and Seattle travels to face
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Original:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the hellmouth of New Orleans have complained bitterly to the Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after Hurricane Katrina destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast .
Revised:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the New Orleans have complained bitterly to the Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after Hurricane Katrina destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast .
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Original:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the hellmouth of New Orleans have complained bitterly to the Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after Hurricane Katrina destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast .
Revised:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the hellmouth of New Orleans have complained to the British Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after Hurricane Katrina destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast .
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Original:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the hellmouth of New Orleans have complained bitterly to the Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after Hurricane Katrina destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast .
Revised:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the hellmouth of New Orleans have complained bitterly to the Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after the hurricane destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast .
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Original:  The US has rebuffed almost all offers that are not monetary or involving oil preferring to go "solo" in the disaster relief of almost a million people and 10's of billions in damage
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Original:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the New Orleans have complained to the British Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after the hurricane destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast   
Revised:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the New Orleans have complained to the British Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after the hurricane destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast . 
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Original:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the New Orleans have complained to the British Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after the hurricane destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast . British nationals living and vacationing in New Orleans repported that U.S. authorities had refused to evacuate them as Hurricane Katrina approached the city, leaving them stranded in their hotels.
Revised:  Many British citizens who were trapped in the New Orleans have complained to the British Foreign Office about the lack of response from their government after the hurricane destablized almost 200 miles of the United States gulf coast British nationals living and vacationing in New Orleans repported that U.S. authorities had refused to evacuate them as Hurricane Katrina approached the city, leaving them stranded in their hotels.
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Original: British nationals living and vacationing in New Orleans repported that U.S. authorities had refused to evacuate them as Hurricane Katrina approached the city, leaving them stranded in their hotels.
Revised: British nationals living and vacationing in New Orleans reported that U.S. authorities had refused to evacuate them as Hurricane Katrina approached the city, leaving them stranded in their hotels.
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Original: Notably, Senator Landrieu was herself criticized by Anderson Cooper (CNN) on Thursday, after she responded to a question by rattling off a list of "thank yous" to other politicians (WMV, trancsript ).
Revised: Notably, Senator Landrieu was herself criticized by Anderson Cooper (CNN) on Thursday, after she responded to a question by rattling off a list of "thank yous" to other politicians (WMV, transcript ).
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Original:  Senator Landrieu says the equipment was dispersed elsewhere the next day, but did not provide specifics as to where the equipment was transported to afterwards . Senator Landrieu made no specific accusations about the photo-op during the ABC tour.
Revised:  Senator Landrieu says the equipment was dispersed elsewhere the next day, but did not provide details . Senator Landrieu made no specific accusations about the photo-op during the ABC tour.
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Original:  The canal wall breach, near Hammond Highway, was  shown Sunday on CBS' 60 Minutes with dump trucks and a power shovel building a single-lane pathway across the gap.
Revised:  The canal wall breach, near Hammond Highway, was later shown Sunday on CBS' 60 Minutes with dump trucks and a power shovel building a single-lane pathway across the gap.
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Original:  Senator Landrieu's press release partially confirms this interpretation by attempting to simultaniously ask the president for more aid, while accusing him of misusing existing resources.
Revised:  Senator Landrieu's press release partially confirms this interpretation by attempting to simultaneously ask the president for more aid, while accusing him of misusing existing resources.
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Original:  Christine Adelhardt of Germany's ARD Tagesschule said "the extent of the staging is shocking me [as much as the disaster.
Revised:  Christine Adelhardt of Germany's ARD Tagesschau said "the extent of the staging is shocking me [as much as the disaster.
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Original:  Their onsite crew claimed that an "open air food distribution point Bush visited in front of the cameras was torn down immediately after the president and the herd of news people had left", and alleges that others were being set up were abandoned at the same time.
Revised:  Their onsite crew claimed that an "open air food distribution point Bush visited in front of the cameras was torn down immediately after the president and the herd of news people had left", and alleges that others being set up were abandoned at the same time.
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Original:     In related news, Germany's ZDF News reported that the president's visit to Biloxi was largely a staged event(video).
Revised:  Obviously placing the metal wall required an assortment of equipment which was no longer needed after it was in place. The wall was only visible from the bridge and most dry land as a few feet of metal along the bridge railing. It is not known if Senator Landrieu noticed this work of engineering, nor if she had been briefed as to what was being done. In related news, Germany's ZDF News reported that the president's visit to Biloxi was largely a staged event(video).
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Original:     In related news, Germany's ZDF News reported that the president's visit to Biloxi was largely a staged event(video).
Revised:  Biloxi event In related news, Germany's ZDF News reported that the president's visit to Biloxi was largely a staged event(video).
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Original:   Mayor Nagin has apologized to the president for his earlier accusations of poor federal support for the victims of Hurricane Katrina.
Revised:  Nagin apology Mayor Nagin has apologized to the president for his earlier accusations of poor federal support for the victims of Hurricane Katrina.
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Original: Nagin apology Mayor Nagin has apologized to the president for his earlier accusations of poor federal support for the victims of Hurricane Katrina.
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Original: 17 Street Canal engineering  Although press reports mentioned the 17th Street Canal breach was blocked by the use of metal sheets, sandbags, and dumped fill, details were not available.
Revised: 17th Street Canal engineering Although press reports mentioned the 17th Street Canal breach was blocked by the use of metal sheets, sandbags, and dumped fill, details were not available.
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