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Original:  This raised fears that another major japanese automotive industrial giant, Toyota, may also quit F1.
Revised:  This raised fears that another major Japanese automotive giant, Toyota, may also quit F1.
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Original:  This raised fears that another major japanese automotive industrial giant, Toyota, may also quit F1.
Revised:  This raised fears that another major japanese automotive industrial giant, Toyota, may also pull out its team Toyota F1.
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Original:  Estimated annual budget Honda spent over the team is $ 500m.
Revised:  It is estimated that Honda had an annual budget of US $ 500m.
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Original: 180px Takeo Fukui, the President and CEO of Honda made a statement on Friday that the company will leave Formula One before 2009.
Revised: 180px Takeo Fukui, the President and CEO of Honda made a statement on Friday that the company will leave Formula One before the 2009 season.
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Original:  The 2009 Formula One season will begin on 29 March , with the Australian Grand Prix in Melbourne
Revised:  The 2009 Formula One season will begin on March 29 , with the Australian Grand Prix in Melbourne
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Original:  It is estimated that Honda had an annual budget of US$ 500 for the team in 2008.
Revised:  It is estimated that Honda had an annual budget of US$ 500m for the team in 2008.
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Original:  It may still be using Honda's engine , as, previously, the BAR-Honda team.
Revised:  It may still be using Honda's engines , as, previously, the BAR-Honda team.
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Original:  The Legacy, owned by ExcelAire, performed an emergency landing at a nearby airbase   
Revised:  The Legacy, owned by ExcelAire, performed an emergency landing at a nearby airbase . 
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Original:  the Legacy was not properly advised on the altitude at which it should be cruising, when one controller changed shift there was a miscommunication between them about the Legacy's altitude and there was a failure of communication between the Legacy and ATC  
Revised:  the Legacy was not properly advised on the altitude at which it should be cruising, when one controller changed shift there was a miscommunication between them about the Legacy's altitude and there was a failure of communication between the Legacy and ATC . 
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Original:  The pair, along with four air traffic contollers, have been indicted over the crash and all six face up to three years in prison each  
Revised:  The pair, along with four air traffic contollers, have been indicted over the crash and all six face up to three years in prison each . 
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Original:  In response, a major overhaul of the nation's military ATC system is underway    ] 
Revised:  In response, a major overhaul of the nation's military ATC system is underway . ] 
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Original:  "[The Air Force] relied on theories rather than conducting in-depth testing of the equipment.  
Revised:  "[The Air Force] relied on theories rather than conducting in-depth testing of the equipment. " 
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Original:  The pair, along with four air traffic contollers , have been indicted over the crash and all six face up to three years in prison each.
Revised:  The pair, along with four air traffic controllers , have been indicted over the crash and all six face up to three years in prison each.
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Original: Wikinews has learned that at least six of the United Kingdom's main Internet Service Providers (ISPs) have implemented monitoring and filtering mechanisms that are causing major problems for UK contributors on websites operated by the Wikimedia Foundation, amongst up to 1200 other websites.
Revised: Wikinews has learned at least six of the United Kingdom's main Internet Service Providers (ISPs) have implemented monitoring and filtering mechanisms that are causing major problems for UK contributors on websites operated by the Wikimedia Foundation, amongst up to 1200 other websites.
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Original:  The filters appear to be applied because Wikimedia sites are hosting a Scorpions  album cover which some call child pornography.
Revised:  The filters appear to be applied because Wikimedia sites are hosting a Scorpions ' album cover which some call child pornography.
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Original:  The Scorpions are a German  rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for their song, "Rock You Like a Hurricane".
Revised:  The Scorpions are a German hard rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for their song, "Rock You Like a Hurricane".
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Original:  The measures applied redirect traffic for a significant portion of the UK's Internet population through six servers which can log and filter the content that is available to the end user.
Revised:  The measures applied redirect traffic for a significant portion of the UK's Internet population through six servers which can log and filter the content available to the end user.
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Original:  A serious side-effect of this is the inability of administrators on Wikimedia sites to block vandals  and other troublemakers  without potentially impacting hundreds of thousands of innocent contributors who are working on the sites in good faith.
Revised:  A serious side-effect of this is the inability of administrators on Wikimedia sites to block vandals , and other troublemakers without potentially impacting hundreds of thousands of innocent contributors who are working on the sites in good faith.
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Original:  A serious side-effect of this is the inability of administrators on Wikimedia sites to block vandals  and other troublemakers  without potentially impacting hundreds of thousands of innocent contributors who are working on the sites in good faith.
Revised:  A serious side-effect of this is the inability of administrators on Wikimedia sites to block vandals and other troublemakers , without potentially impacting hundreds of thousands of innocent contributors who are working on the sites in good faith.
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Original:  The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content that have been reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children , under the age of 18.
Revised:  The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children , under the age of 18.
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Original:  The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content that have been reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children , under the age of 18.
Revised:  The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content that have been reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children .
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Original:  The IWF says that there are at least 800 to 1,200 websites on the list of those who host or contain offensive material.
Revised:  The IWF say there are at least 800 to 1,200 websites on the list of those who host or contain offensive material.
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Original:  The list is not public and the IWF never notified Wikimedia Foundation about  blocking of Wikipedia content.
Revised:  The list is not public and the IWF never notified Wikimedia Foundation about the blocking of Wikipedia content.
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Original:  The IWF states that  "we do not notify site owners that their websites are on our list." 200px|1976 album cover for the Scorpions which also appears on Amazon.com and many other sites.
Revised:  The IWF states that , "we do not notify site owners that their websites are on our list." 200px|1976 album cover for the Scorpions which also appears on Amazon.com and many other sites.
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Original:  Earlier  on December 6, the image was put back up for a deletion request, but it was later closed as Wikimedia "does not censor".
Revised:  Earlier , on December 6, the image was put back up for a deletion request, but it was later closed as Wikimedia "does not censor".
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Original:  The filters appear to be applied because Wikimedia sites are hosting a Scorpions ' album cover which some call child pornography.
Revised:  The filters appear to be applied because Wikimedia sites are hosting a Scorpions album cover which some call child pornography.
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Original:  The Scorpions are a German hard rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for their song , " Rock You Like a Hurricane " . The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children.
Revised:  Scorpions are a German hard rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for their song , " Rock You Like a Hurricane " . The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children.
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Original:  The Scorpions are a German hard rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for their song , " Rock You Like a Hurricane " . The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children.
Revised:  The Scorpions are a German hard rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for the song Rock You Like a Hurricane " . The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children.
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Original:  The Scorpions are a German hard rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for their song , " Rock You Like a Hurricane " . The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children.
Revised:  The Scorpions are a German hard rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for their song , " Rock You Like a Hurricane . The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children.
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Original:  The Scorpions are a German hard rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for their song , " Rock You Like a Hurricane " . The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host or contain content reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children.
Revised:  The Scorpions are a German hard rock band who have used several controversial album covers and are perhaps best known for their song , " Rock You Like a Hurricane " . The filtering is in response to the Internet Watch Foundation's list of websites that host content reported to contain inappropriate images of naked children.
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Original:  However, in the United States ( where the websites of the Wikimedia Foundation are hosted ) , it is not considered obscene under the criteria of the Miller test, which requires that an obscene work lack "serious literary, artistic, political or scientific value"
Revised:  However, in the United States , where the websites of the Wikimedia Foundation are hosted ) , it is not considered obscene under the criteria of the Miller test, which requires that an obscene work lack "serious literary, artistic, political or scientific value"
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Original:  However, in the United States ( where the websites of the Wikimedia Foundation are hosted ) , it is not considered obscene under the criteria of the Miller test, which requires that an obscene work lack "serious literary, artistic, political or scientific value"
Revised:  However, in the United States ( where the websites of the Wikimedia Foundation are hosted , it is not considered obscene under the criteria of the Miller test, which requires that an obscene work lack "serious literary, artistic, political or scientific value"
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Original:  ( as album art is used to "brand" the album, it is considered to be artistic ) . Contributors or individuals attempting to view an affected image or file, depending on their ISP, may get a warning saying, "we have blocked this page because, according to the Internet Watch Foundation (IWF), it contains indecent images of children or pointers to them;
Revised:  - as album art is used to "brand" the album, it is considered to be artistic ) . Contributors or individuals attempting to view an affected image or file, depending on their ISP, may get a warning saying, "we have blocked this page because, according to the Internet Watch Foundation (IWF), it contains indecent images of children or pointers to them;
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Original:  ( as album art is used to "brand" the album, it is considered to be artistic ) . Contributors or individuals attempting to view an affected image or file, depending on their ISP, may get a warning saying, "we have blocked this page because, according to the Internet Watch Foundation (IWF), it contains indecent images of children or pointers to them;
Revised:  ( as album art is used to "brand" the album, it is considered to be artistic . Contributors or individuals attempting to view an affected image or file, depending on their ISP, may get a warning saying, "we have blocked this page because, according to the Internet Watch Foundation (IWF), it contains indecent images of children or pointers to them;
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Original:  you could be breaking UK law if you viewed the page." . Other ISPs provide blank pages, 404 errors, or other means of blocking the content.
Revised:  you could be breaking UK law if you viewed the page." Other ISPs provide blank pages, 404 errors, or other means of blocking the content.
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Original:  Due to a configuration mistake at an Internet service provider, some users have reported being totally unable to access Wikimedia sites to the Wikipedia technical help desk.
Revised:  Due to a configuration mistake at one Internet service provider, some users have reported being totally unable to access Wikimedia sites to the Wikipedia technical help desk.
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Original:  The concern for Wikimedia is for some images like an album cover from a 1976 record of the Scorpions titled 'Virgin Killer' . It displays an underage girl, posing nude, with a lens crack crossing over her genitals, but nothing blocking out her breasts.
Revised:  The concern for Wikimedia is for some images like an album cover from a 1976 record of the Scorpions titled Virgin Killer . It displays an underage girl, posing nude, with a lens crack crossing over her genitals, but nothing blocking out her breasts.
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Original:  The girl appears to be around 10-years old.
Revised:  The girl appears to be around ten years old.
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Original:  It was deleted due to a claim by an administrator that it violated Wikipedia's policy for dealing with copyrighted images, which require that any images used under the doctrine of fair use must alongside other criteria, "significantly increase readers' understanding of the topic, and its omission would be detrimental to that understanding" ( claiming that the article "lacked meaningful discussion" of the album art ) .
Revised:  It was deleted due to a claim by an administrator that it violated Wikipedia's policy for dealing with copyrighted images, which require that any images used under the doctrine of fair use must alongside other criteria, "significantly increase readers' understanding of the topic, and its omission would be detrimental to that understanding" , with the administrator claiming that the article "lacked meaningful discussion" of the album art ) .
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Original:  It was deleted due to a claim by an administrator that it violated Wikipedia's policy for dealing with copyrighted images, which require that any images used under the doctrine of fair use must alongside other criteria, "significantly increase readers' understanding of the topic, and its omission would be detrimental to that understanding" ( claiming that the article "lacked meaningful discussion" of the album art ) .
Revised:  It was deleted due to a claim by an administrator that it violated Wikipedia's policy for dealing with copyrighted images, which require that any images used under the doctrine of fair use must alongside other criteria, "significantly increase readers' understanding of the topic, and its omission would be detrimental to that understanding" ( claiming that the article "lacked meaningful discussion" of the album art .
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Original: However, Demon Internet redirects users to a block message on the IFW 's site explaining that the page was blocked as the organization suspects child porn or links to it to be present.
Revised: However, Demon Internet redirects users to a block message on the IWF 's site explaining that the page was blocked as the organization suspects child porn or links to it to be present.
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Original:  Commenting on the delay of the MSL, NASA Administrator Mike Griffin said " " Trying for '09 would require us to assume too much risk, more than I think is appropriate for a flagship mission,"
Revised:  Commenting on the delay of the MSL, NASA Administrator Mike Griffin said " Trying for '09 would require us to assume too much risk, more than I think is appropriate for a flagship mission,"
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Original:  And we're certainly open to it and would welcome it 
Revised:  And we're certainly open to it and would welcome it .
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Original: NASA announced a delay to its next planned mission to Mars at a news conference on thursday , 4th of December.
Revised: NASA announced a delay to its next planned mission to Mars at a news conference on Thursday , 4th of December.
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Original:  Atmospheric entry into Mars has always been a difficult prospect for scientific probes with many probes being lost, most recently the British Beagle 2 probe from 2003 which was due to land on a series of inflated baloons but was never heard from after entering the atmosphere.
Revised:  Atmospheric entry into Mars has always been a difficult prospect for scientific probes with many probes being lost, most recently the British Beagle 2 probe from 2003 which was due to land on a series of inflated balloons but was never heard from after entering the atmosphere.
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Original:  Commenting on the delay of the MSL, NASA Administrator Mike Griffin said "Trying for '09 would require us to assume too much risk, more than I think is appropriate for a flagship mission," Artist's impression of the Mars Science Laboratory rover searching for life on Mars The MSL was due to feature several new technologies, including a hovering platform that would lower the rover onto the surface and new atmospheric entry methods.
Revised:  Commenting on the delay of the MSL, NASA Administrator Mike Griffin said "Trying for '09 would require us to assume too much risk, more than I think is appropriate for a flagship mission," The MSL was due to feature several new technologies, including a hovering platform that would lower the rover onto the surface and new atmospheric entry methods.
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Original:  The Mars Science Laboratory was due to launch in 2011 but lift off will now not occur until 2011 after more time required for tests means the lander will not be ready in time for the 2009 window.
Revised:  The Mars Science Laboratory was due to launch in 2009 but lift off will now not occur until 2011 after more time required for tests means the lander will not be ready in time for the 2009 window.
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Original:  This delay comes just 2 months after the European Space Agency ( ESA)delayed their planned ExoMars mission until 2016.
Revised:  This delay comes just 2 months after the European Space Agency ESA)delayed their planned ExoMars mission until 2016.
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Original:  The delays and additional fabrication and testing have inflated the budget of the project an additional $400 million, bringing the total to $ 2.4 billion.
Revised:  The delays and additional fabrication and testing have inflated the budget of the project by an additional 400 million US dollars, bringing the total to 2.4 billion.
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Original:  These increasing costs of Mars missions is what forced the decision by the ESA to delay its ExoMars mission and has now prompted talk of increased co-operation on future missions.
Revised:  These increasing costs of Mars missions are what forced the decision by the ESA to delay its ExoMars mission and has now prompted talk of increased co-operation on future missions.
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Original:  These increasing costs of Mars missions is what forced the decision by the ESA to delay its ExoMars mission and has now prompted talk of increased co-operation on future missions.
Revised:  These increasing costs of Mars missions is what forced the decision by the ESA to delay its ExoMars mission , and they have now prompted talk of increased co-operation on future missions.
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Original: Artist's impression of the Mars Science Laboratory rover searching for life on MarsNASA announced a delay to its next planned mission to Mars at a news conference on Thursday, 4th of December.
Revised: Artist's impression of the Mars Science Laboratory rover searching for life on Mars NASA announced a delay to its next planned mission to Mars at a news conference on Thursday, 4th of December.
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Original:  This delay comes just 2 months after the European Space Agency  ESA) delayed their planned ExoMars mission until 2016.
Revised:  This delay comes just 2 months after the European Space Agency ( ESA) delayed their planned ExoMars mission until 2016.
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Original:  Related Stories Bomb blasts kill several in Iran More political, soccer-related unrest in Iran follows Bahrain victory Continuing civil unrest in Iran fueled by election tensions, soccer victory Iranian opposition group declares all acts of current government voi
Revised:  Related Stories More political, soccer-related unrest in Iran follows Bahrain victory Continuing civil unrest in Iran fueled by election tensions, soccer victory Iranian opposition group declares all acts of current government voi
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Original:  The blasts occured around 4:30 local time.
Revised:  The blasts occurred at around 4:30 local time.
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Original:  The blasts occurred at around 4:30 local time. [ [ 
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Original:  The blasts occurred at around 4:30 local time. [ [ 
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Original: Three separate explosions have been reported in Zahedan, a city in southeast Iran near the Afghan and Pakistan borders.
Revised: Three separate explosions have been reported in Zahedan, a city in southeast Iran near the Afghan and Pakistinian borders.
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Original:  The US government will be holding weekend talks on the plan after two days of Congressional hearings.
Revised:  The U.S. government will be holding weekend talks on the plan after two days of Congressional hearings.
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Original:  Executives from the three companies - General Motors, Ford, and Chrysler - have pleaded before two Congressional comitees , asking for $34 billion in order to stop collapse.
Revised:  Executives from the three companies - General Motors, Ford, and Chrysler - have pleaded before two Congressional committees , asking for $34 billion in order to stop collapse.
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