wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Across the world, the large majority of recruits to state armed forces and non-state armed groups are male.
Revised: Across the world, a large majority of recruits to state armed forces and non-state armed groups are male.
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Original:  A finger print scan is conducted and a practice ASVAB exam is given to them.
Revised:  A fingerprint scan is conducted and a practice ASVAB exam is given to them.
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Original:  Applicants can not officially swear their enlistment oath in the recruiting office.
Revised:  Applicants cannot officially swear their enlistment oath in the recruiting office.
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Original:  This is conducted at a Military Entrance Processing Station – MEPS . United States Navy recruitment poster from 1918.
Revised:  This is conducted at a Military Entrance Processing Station (MEPS) . United States Navy recruitment poster from 1918.
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Original: French marines recruitement poster U.S. Navy recruitment advertisement in Popular Mechanics, 1908.
Revised: French marines recruitement posterg U.S. Navy recruitment advertisement in Popular Mechanics, 1908.
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Original:  A former head of recruitment for the British Army, Colonel (latterly Brigadier) David Allfrey, explained the British approach in 2007: " Our new model is about raising awareness, and that takes a ten-year span.
Revised:  A former head of recruitment for the British Army, Colonel (latterly Brigadier) David Allfrey, explained the British approach in 2007: Our new model is about raising awareness, and that takes a ten-year span.
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Original:  From then the army is trying to build interest by drip, drip, drip. "
Revised:  From then the army is trying to build interest by drip, drip, drip. 
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Original: French marines recruitement posterg U.S. Navy recruitment advertisement in Popular Mechanics, 1908.
Revised: French marines recruitement poster U.S. Navy recruitment advertisement in Popular Mechanics, 1908.
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Original:  Licensing and accrediting agencies -- such as Centers for Medicare and Medicaid URL Accreditation Association for Ambulatory Health Care (AAAHC), The Joint Commission (JC) and individual states licensing bodies encourage healthcare facilities to use consultant pharmacists.
Revised:  Licensing and accrediting agencies such as Centers for Medicare and Medicaid URL Accreditation Association for Ambulatory Health Care (AAAHC), The Joint Commission (JC) and individual states licensing bodies encourage healthcare facilities to use consultant pharmacists.
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Original:  Consultants may specialize in one of the following areas: Regulatory, Quality, Technical, or URL United Kingdom In the UK's NHS, the term consultant pharmacist refers to a pharmacist who has advanced roles in patient care, research and education in a specific medical speciality or expert area of practice.
Revised:  Consultants may specialize in one of the following areas: Regulatory, Quality, Technical, or Clinical. United Kingdom In the UK's NHS, the term consultant pharmacist refers to a pharmacist who has advanced roles in patient care, research and education in a specific medical speciality or expert area of practice.
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Original: Lakia, Lakistan (Lak: Lak, Lakral kanu, Lakral bilayat, Lakkuy)Names as "Lakia", "Lakistan", "Lak", "Lakral kanu", "Lakkuy" and "Lakku bilayat", identically mean the "Lak" territory. is the name of the ethnic territory of the Laks in Dagestan in the North Caucasus.
Revised: Lakia, Lakistan (Lak: Lak, Lakral kanu, Lakku bilayat, Lakkuy)Names as "Lakia", "Lakistan", "Lak", "Lakral kanu", "Lakkuy" and "Lakku bilayat", identically mean the "Lak" territory. is the name of the ethnic territory of the Laks in Dagestan in the North Caucasus.
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Original:  Territory 250px|Flag of the Laks used in historical context 250px|The map showing the territory of Lakia in bright red in the mountainous southern Dagestan Geographical location Lakia is bordered to the North and West by Avaria, to the East by Dargo (occasionally called Darginstan or Darganstan), to the South by Agul and Rutul.
Revised:  Geographical location Lakia is bordered to the North and West by Avaria, to the East by Dargo (occasionally called Darginstan or Darganstan), to the South by Agul and Rutul.
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Original: New time Alibek II formed the Gazikumukh Khanate.
Revised: Modern Era Alibek II formed the Gazikumukh Khanate.
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Original:  Haroun Saidov (writer of the postrevolutionary era, b. in Vachi village in 1891, shot by the Denikin bandits in Kumukh in 1919) founded the Lak newspaper "Ilchi", was the author of several poetry and prose articles and the first social drama in Lak lang. — "Kalaychital".
Revised:  Haroun Saidov (writer of the postrevolutionary era, b. in Vachi village in 1891, shot by the Denikin bandits in Kumukh in 1919) founded the Lak newspaper "Ilchi", was the author of several poetry and prose articles and the first social drama in the Lak language — "Kalaychital".
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Original: Modern Era Alibek II formed the Gazikumukh Khanate.
Revised: Modern era Alibek II formed the Gazikumukh Khanate.
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Original: 250px|The map showing the territory of Lakia in bright red in the mountainous southern Dagestan Lakia, Lakistan (Lak: Lak, Lakral kanu, Lakku bilayat, Lakkuy)Names as "Lakia", "Lakistan", "Lak", "Lakral kanu", "Lakkuy" and "Lakku bilayat", identically mean the "Lak" territory. is the name of the ethnic territory of the Laks in Dagestan in the North Caucasus  . Kumukh is the main historical, cultural, spiritual and political center of Lakia that consists of Lakskiy and Kulinskiy districts.
Revised: 250px|The map showing the territory of Lakia in bright red in the mountainous southern Dagestan Lakia, Lakistan (Lak: Lak, Lakral kanu, Lakku bilayat, Lakkuy)Names as "Lakia", "Lakistan", "Lak", "Lakral kanu", "Lakkuy" and "Lakku bilayat", identically mean the "Lak" territory. is the name of the ethnic territory of the Laks in Dagestan in the North Caucasus of Eastern Europe . Kumukh is the main historical, cultural, spiritual and political center of Lakia that consists of Lakskiy and Kulinskiy districts.
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Original: Nathan Jackson at work in his studio in August 2012.
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Original:  Nathan Jackson (born August 29, 1938 1 ) is an Alaska Native artist.
Revised:  Nathan Jackson (born August 29, 1938 ) is an Alaska Native artist.
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Original:  He is among the most important living Tlingit artists 2 and the most important Alaskan artists.
Revised:  He is among the most important living Tlingit artists and the most important Alaskan artists.
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Original:  3 He is best known for his totem poles, but works in a variety of media.
Revised:  He is best known for his totem poles, but works in a variety of media.
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Original:  1 As a young adult, he served in the military in Germany, and then became involved in commercial fishing.
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Original:  1 While ill with pneumonia and unable to fish, he began to carve miniature totem poles.
Revised:  While ill with pneumonia and unable to fish, he began to carve miniature totem poles.
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Original:  1 His interest in art was piqued, and he enrolled in the Institute of American Indian Arts in Santa Fe, New Mexico.
Revised:  His interest in art was piqued, and he enrolled in the Institute of American Indian Arts in Santa Fe, New Mexico.
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Original:  1 Since then, Jackson's work has included large totem poles, canoes, carved doors, wood panel clan crests, masks, and jewelry.
Revised:  Since then, Jackson's work has included large totem poles, canoes, carved doors, wood panel clan crests, masks, and jewelry.
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Original:  1 Jackson has worked to pass on traditional Tlingit carving skills to younger artists, and has offered many demonstrations and workshops in Alaska and the Pacific Northwest. 1 
Revised:  Jackson has worked to pass on traditional Tlingit carving skills to younger artists, and has offered many demonstrations and workshops in Alaska and the Pacific Northwest. 1 
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Original: The Steps to War explanation is a theory of international relations based on the issue paradigm that empirically establishes the war-proneness of territorial issues and the use of power politics practices.
Revised: The Steps To War explanation is a theory of international relations based on the issue paradigm that empirically establishes the war-proneness of territorial issues and the use of power politics practices.
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Original:  The Steps to War framework posits an underlying and proximate cause of war.
Revised:  The Steps To War framework posits an underlying and proximate cause of war.
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Original: Vasquez 1983Gibler 1997 The Steps to War explanation makes two major contributions to the war literature.
Revised: Vasquez 1983Gibler 1997 The Steps To War explanation makes two major contributions to the war literature.
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Original:  The Jonglei Canal is a canal project that has been proposed, started but never completed to divert water through the vast Sudd wetlands of South Sudan so as to deliver more water downstream to Sudan and Egypt for use in agriculture.
Revised:  The Jonglei Canal was a canal project that has been proposed, started but never completed to divert water through the vast Sudd wetlands of South Sudan so as to deliver more water downstream to Sudan and Egypt for use in agriculture.
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Original:  The Jonglei Canal is a canal project that has been proposed, started but never completed to divert water through the vast Sudd wetlands of South Sudan so as to deliver more water downstream to Sudan and Egypt for use in agriculture.
Revised:  The Jonglei Canal is a canal project Started but never completed to divert water through the vast Sudd wetlands of South Sudan so as to deliver more water downstream to Sudan and Egypt for use in agriculture.
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Original:  By 1984 when the Sudan People's Liberation Army (SPLA ) brought the works to a halt, 240 km of the canal of a total of 360 km had been excavated.
Revised:  By 1984 when the SPLA brought the works to a halt, 240 km of the canal of a total of 360 km had been excavated.
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Original:  Formalin-fixed tissue is normally mordanted with Bouin solution for better staining results in the trichrome stains.
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Original: Charles Barney Hicks (? – 1902) was an African-American advance man, manager, performer, and owner of blackface minstrel troupes composed of African American performers.
Revised: Charles Barney Hicks (? – 1902) was an African-American advance man, manager, performer, and owner of blackface minstrel troupes composed of African-American performers.
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Original:  Chicago. Quoted in Toll  212.
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Original: Advertisements quoted in Toll  213.
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Original: "Advertisement quoted in Toll  214.
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Original: Charles Barney Hicks (? – 1902) was an African-American advance man, manager, performer, and owner of blackface minstrel troupes composed of African-American performers.
Revised: Charles Barney Hicks (? – 1902) was an American advance man, manager, performer, and owner of blackface minstrel troupes composed of African-American performers.
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Original:  Hicks himself was a talented minstrel performer who could sing and play challenging roles such as the minstrel-show interlocutor or endmen.
Revised:  Hicks himself was a minstrel performer who could sing and play challenging roles such as the minstrel-show interlocutor or endmen.
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Original: Therapeutics Nanobiotix has developed a new class of therapeutics based on nanoparticles, NanoXray™ therapeutics.
Revised: Therapeutics Nanobiotix developed a new class of therapeutics based on nanoparticles, NanoXray™ therapeutics.
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Original: Nanobiotix is a nanomedicine company dedicated to the development of new treatments for cancer based on the combined application of nanotechnologies and biotechnologies .
Revised: Nanobiotix is a biotechnology company that uses nanomedicine to develop new radiotherapy techniques for cancer patients .
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Revised:  The product is designed to enhance the overall efficacy of radiotherapy without resulting in additional side effects. 
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Revised:  Nanobiotix obtained the first European marketing authorization (CE marking) for Hensify, the commercial name of NBTXR3, for the treatment of locally advanced Soft Tissue Sarcoma. 
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Revised:  Head and Neck Cancer Chemotherapy in combination with radiation is the standard treatment for locally advanced head and neck cancers in both the United States of America and the European Union. However, such treatment cannot usually be proposed to elderly and frail patients, as they are unable to endure the physical strain inherent in chemotherapy treatment. 
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Revised:  NBTXR3 is currently in Phase II/III clinical trials to increase radiotherapy’s efficacy at treating Head and neck cancer. As of 2020, the study is recruiting participants in Taiwan. 
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Revised:  Colorectal cancer is the third most common cancer in men and the second most common cancer in women. The five-year survival rate for patients with Rectal cancer is 64.4\%, but varies greatly depending on the stage of the cancer and whether the cancer has spread.4NBTXR3 is currently in Phase I/II clinical trials to increase radiotherapy’s efficacy at treating rectal cancer. As of 2020, the study is recruiting participants in Taiwan. 
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Original:  As of 2020, the study is recruiting participants in several states in the USA . Chief Executive Officer (CEO) and Chairman of the Board: Laurent Levy Chief Financial Officer (CFO): Philippe Mauberna Chief People Officer (Chief_human_resources_officer): Anne-Juliette Hermant CEO Nanobiotix USA & Global Head of Business Development(CEO, USA ): Patrick Tricoli Chief Operating Officer (COO): Alain Dostie
Revised:  As of 2020, the study is recruiting participants in several states in the United States . Chief Executive Officer (CEO) and Chairman of the Board: Laurent Levy Chief Financial Officer (CFO): Philippe Mauberna Chief People Officer (Chief_human_resources_officer): Anne-Juliette Hermant CEO Nanobiotix USA & Global Head of Business Development(CEO, USA ): Patrick Tricoli Chief Operating Officer (COO): Alain Dostie
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Original:  As of 2020, the study is recruiting participants in several states in the USA . Chief Executive Officer (CEO) and Chairman of the Board: Laurent Levy Chief Financial Officer (CFO): Philippe Mauberna Chief People Officer (Chief_human_resources_officer): Anne-Juliette Hermant CEO Nanobiotix USA & Global Head of Business Development(CEO, USA ): Patrick Tricoli Chief Operating Officer (COO): Alain Dostie
Revised:  As of 2020, the study is recruiting participants in several states in the USA . Chief Executive Officer (CEO) and Chairman of the Board: Laurent Levy Chief Financial Officer (CFO): Philippe Mauberna Chief People Officer (Chief_human_resources_officer): Anne-Juliette Hermant CEO Nanobiotix USA & Global Head of Business Development(CEO, United States ): Patrick Tricoli Chief Operating Officer (COO): Alain Dostie
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Original:  People from Luoyang Category:Hui people Category:Chinese footballers Category:Footballers from Henan Category:China international footballers Category:Beijing Guoan F.C. players Category:Henan Jianye F.C. players Category:Chengdu Tiancheng F.C. players Category:Jiangxi Liansheng players Category:Sichuan Longfor F.C. players Category:Singapore Premier League players Category:Chinese Super League players Category:China League One players Category:Association football defende
Revised:  Politicians from Luoyang Category:Hui people Category:Chinese footballers Category:Footballers from Henan Category:China international footballers Category:Beijing Guoan F.C. players Category:Henan Jianye F.C. players Category:Chengdu Tiancheng F.C. players Category:Jiangxi Liansheng players Category:Sichuan Longfor F.C. players Category:Singapore Premier League players Category:Chinese Super League players Category:China League One players Category:Association football defende
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Original: Club career statistics Statistics accurate as of match played 4 November 2018.
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Original:  League1412000-161 China PR League FA Cup CSL Cup Asia Total2011Beijing GuoanChinese Super League0000---002011Sichuan DujiangyanChina League Two12000---1202012Henan JianyeChinese Super League0010---102013China League One6020---802014Chengdu Tiancheng25000---2502015Jiangxi Liansheng29020--3102016China League Two22110--2312017Sichuan Longfor22110--231201828230--312 Total Singapore141200000161 China PR144410000001544 Career total158512000001705 
Revised:  League1412000-161 China PR League FA Cup CSL Cup Asia Total2011Beijing GuoanChinese Super League0000---002011Sichuan DujiangyanChina League Two12000---1202012Henan JianyeChinese Super League0010---102013China League One6020---802014Chengdu Tiancheng25000---2502015Jiangxi Liansheng29020--3102016China League Two22110--2312017Sichuan Longfor22110--231201828230--312 Total Singapore141200000161 China PR144410000001544 Career total158512000001705 Honours Henan Jianye China League One: 2013
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Original:  He went on to make his senior debut in a league game against Balestier Khalsa FC on 24 March 2010 in a 1-0 defeat.
Revised:  He went on to make his senior debut in a league game against Balestier Khalsa FC on 24 March 2010 in a 1–0 defeat.
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Original:  After establishing himself as a regular member of the team he scored his first senior goal on 29 April 2010 in a league game against Woodlands Wellington FC in a 2-1 victory.
Revised:  After establishing himself as a regular member of the team he scored his first senior goal on 29 April 2010 in a league game against Woodlands Wellington FC in a 2–1 victory.
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Original: 中乙球队官方宣布前国安小将加盟 at sports.sohu.com 2017-01-20 Retrieved 2017-01-20 International career Ma Chongchong was called up into the Chinese U-20's squad in 2009 to take part in the 2010 AFC U-19 Championship qualification process, which saw him play in every game while China topped the group.
Revised: 中乙球队官方宣布前国安小将加盟 at sports.sohu.com 2017-01-20 Retrieved 20 January 2017 International career Ma Chongchong was called up into the Chinese U-20's squad in 2009 to take part in the 2010 AFC U-19 Championship qualification process, which saw him play in every game while China topped the group.
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Original:  He was included in the squad that took part in the 2010 AFC U-19 Championship, however he had to fight for his place within the team and had to wait until the final group game against Thailand in a 1-1 draw before he saw any playing time within the campaign.
Revised:  He was included in the squad that took part in the 2010 AFC U-19 Championship, however he had to fight for his place within the team and had to wait until the final group game against Thailand in a 1–1 draw before he saw any playing time within the campaign.
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Original:  His performance was good enough for him to be included in the team that played North Korea in the quarter-finals in a game that China lost 2-0.
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Original:  On 26 March 2011 the Chinese head coach Gao Hongbo decided to promote Ma into the senior team for a friendly against Costa Rica in an experimental team in which Lang Zheng, Jin Jingdao, Lü Peng, Ye Weichao and Zhang Xizhe also made their first appearances in a game that ended in 2-2 draw.
Revised:  On 26 March 2011 the Chinese head coach Gao Hongbo decided to promote Ma into the senior team for a friendly against Costa Rica in an experimental team in which Lang Zheng, Jin Jingdao, Lü Peng, Ye Weichao and Zhang Xizhe also made their first appearances in a game that ended in 2–2 draw.
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Original: FA Cup CSL Cup Asia Total2011Beijing GuoanChinese Super League0000---002011Sichuan DujiangyanChina League Two12000---1202012Henan JianyeChinese Super League0010---102013China League One6020---802014Chengdu Tiancheng25000---2502015Jiangxi Liansheng29020--3102016China League Two22110--2312017Sichuan Longfor22110--231201828230--3122019China League One32000---320 Total Singapore141200000161 China PR176410000001864 Career total190512000002025 Honours Henan Jianye China League One: 2013 
Revised: FA Cup CSL Cup Asia Total2011Beijing GuoanChinese Super League0000---002011Sichuan DujiangyanChina League Two12000---1202012Henan JianyeChinese Super League0010---102013China League One6020---802014Chengdu Tiancheng25000---2502015Jiangxi Liansheng29020--3102016China League Two22110--2312017Sichuan Longfor22110--231201828230--3122019China League One32000---320 Total Singapore141200000161 China PR176410000001864 Career total190512000002025 Honours Henan Jianye China League One: 2013 Sichuan Longfor China League Two: 2018
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Original: Ma Chongchong (born 17 January 1991) is a professional Chinese football player who currently plays as a defender for Chinese Super League side Shijiazhuang Ever Bright.
Revised: Ma Chongchong (born 17 January 1991) is a professional Chinese football player who currently plays as a defender for Shijiazhuang Ever Bright.
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Original:  League1412000-161Beijing Guoan2011Chinese Super League0000--00Sichuan Dujiangyan (loan)
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Original: 2011China League Two12000--120Henan Jianye2012Chinese Super League0010--102013China League One6020--80 Total6030000090Chengdu Tiancheng (loan)2014China League One25000--250Jiangxi Liansheng201529020--3102016China League Two22110--231 Total511300000541Sichuan Longfor2017China League Two22110--231201828230--3122019China League One32000--320 Total823400000863 Career total190512000002025 Honours  Henan Jianye China League One: 2013
Revised: 2011China League Two12000---120Henan Jianye2012Chinese Super League0010--102013China League One6020--80 Total6030000090Chengdu Tiancheng (loan)2014China League One25000--250Jiangxi Liansheng201529020--3102016China League Two22110--231 Total511300000541Sichuan Longfor2017China League Two22110--231201828230--3122019China League One32000--320 Total823400000863 Career total190512000002025 Honours Henan Jianye China League One: 2013
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Original: 2011China League Two12000--120Henan Jianye2012Chinese Super League0010--102013China League One6020--80 Total6030000090Chengdu Tiancheng (loan)2014China League One25000--250Jiangxi Liansheng201529020--3102016China League Two22110--231 Total511300000541Sichuan Longfor2017China League Two22110--231201828230--3122019China League One32000--320 Total823400000863 Career total190512000002025 Honours  Henan Jianye China League One: 2013
Revised: 2011China League Two12000--120Henan Jianye2012Chinese Super League0010---102013China League One6020---80 Total603000000090Chengdu Tiancheng (loan)2014China League One25000--250Jiangxi Liansheng201529020--3102016China League Two22110--231 Total511300000541Sichuan Longfor2017China League Two22110--231201828230--3122019China League One32000--320 Total823400000863 Career total190512000002025 Honours Henan Jianye China League One: 2013
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