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Original: Allegations have erupted that an episode of a popular national Australian "current affairs" style TV show Today Tonight , that was shown last night on Media Watch, have deliberately edited an interview with a Muslim youth to provoke a derogatory stereotype against the Muslim community.
Revised: Allegations have erupted that an episode of a popular national Australian "current affairs" style TV show Today Tonight , that was shown last night on Media Watch, have deliberately edited an interview with a Muslim youth out of context, with the intention of presenting a negative stereotype against the Muslim community.
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Original:    Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer, for a short documentary to air on Channel 7. Cautious due to prior misrepresentation, Elayoubi was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, Channel 7's head of news and current affairs.
Revised:  Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer, for a short documentary to air on Channel 7. Cautious because of a prior misrepresentation, Elayoubi was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, Channel 7's head of news and current affairs.
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Original:  Elayoubi said "Tim told us he’d be doing the editing himself and would give it to Channel 7 completed . " and was assured that quotes would not be taken out of context to further vilify Australian Muslims.
Revised:  Elayoubi said "Tim told us he’d be doing the editing himself and would give it to Channel 7 completed , " and was assured that quotes would not be taken out of context to further vilify Australian Muslims.
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Original:  The quote "we will never integrate, the way other communities integrate purely because of the fact that you have to draw a line with what your idea of integration is and what our idea of integration and accepting the practices of other people are . " was reduced to "we will never integrate" during editing.
Revised:  The quote "we will never integrate, the way other communities integrate purely because of the fact that you have to draw a line with what your idea of integration is and what our idea of integration and accepting the practices of other people are , " was reduced to "we will never integrate" during editing.
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Original:  This truncated quote was then picked up by other media bodies, most noticably talk radio, where it was demonstrated to incite religious and racial intolerance.
Revised:  This truncated quote was then picked up by other media bodies, most noticably talk radio, where it was allegedly used to incite religious and racial intolerance.
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Original: Australian media analysis program Media Watch has accused popular national "current affairs" style TV show Today Tonight of deliberately quoting a Muslim youth out of context, with the intention of presenting a negative stereotype against the Muslim community.
Revised: Australian media analysis program Media Watch has accused popular national "current affairs" style program Today Tonight of deliberately quoting a Muslim youth out of context, with the intention of presenting a negative stereotype against the Muslim community.
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Original: Australian media analysis program Media Watch has accused popular national "current affairs" style TV show Today Tonight of deliberately quoting a Muslim youth out of context, with the intention of presenting a negative stereotype against the Muslim community.
Revised: Australian media analysis program Media Watch has accused popular national "current affairs" style TV show Today Tonight of deliberately quoting a Muslim youth out of context, with the intention of presenting a negative stereotype of the Muslim community.
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Original:  According to Mediawatch, Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer , for a short documentary to air on Channel 7. Cautious because of a prior misrepresentation, Elayoubi was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, Channel 7 's head of news and current affairs.
Revised:  According to Mediawatch, Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer wanting to produce a short documentary to air on Channel 7. Cautious because of a prior misrepresentation, Elayoubi was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, Channel 7 's head of news and current affairs.
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Original:  According to Mediawatch, Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer , for a short documentary to air on Channel 7. Cautious because of a prior misrepresentation, Elayoubi was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, Channel 7 's head of news and current affairs.
Revised:  According to Mediawatch, Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer , for a short documentary to air on the Seven Network. Mr Elayoubi was cautious because of a prior misrepresentation, Elayoubi was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, Channel 7 's head of news and current affairs.
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Original:  According to Mediawatch, Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer , for a short documentary to air on Channel 7. Cautious because of a prior misrepresentation, Elayoubi was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, Channel 7 's head of news and current affairs.
Revised:  According to Mediawatch, Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer , for a short documentary to air on Channel 7. Cautious because of a prior misrepresentation, however was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, Channel 7 's head of news and current affairs.
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Original:  According to Mediawatch, Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer , for a short documentary to air on Channel 7. Cautious because of a prior misrepresentation, Elayoubi was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, Channel 7 's head of news and current affairs.
Revised:  According to Mediawatch, Abdul Elayoubi of the Lebanese Muslim Association was approached by Tim Noonan, a freelance film producer , for a short documentary to air on Channel 7. Cautious because of a prior misrepresentation, Elayoubi was assured that the program would "show Australians from non-Islamic backgrounds the viewpoint of young Muslims and the pressure they face in an often hostile society", according to a letter from Peter Meakin, the Seven Network 's head of news and current affairs.
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Original:  Allegedly, despite prior reassurances, Tim Noonan did not produce a completed documentary.
Revised:  Despite prior reassurances, Tim Noonan did not produce a completed documentary.
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Original:  The reaction to the out of context quote was then further sensationalised by Today Tonight in a follow-up piece the next evening
Revised:  The quote was then further sensationalised by Today Tonight in a follow-up piece the next evening
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Original:  The reaction to the out of context quote was then further sensationalised by Today Tonight in a follow-up piece the next evening
Revised:  The reaction to the out of context quote was then further publicised by Today Tonight in a follow-up piece the next evening
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Original:  The allegations were aired during Monday nights episode.
Revised:  The allegations were aired during Monday night's episode.
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Original: Helen Clark (Prime Minister) and Don Brash (Leader of the Opposition) have gone head-to-head in the first live televised debate between the two leaders in the New Zealand General Election 2005.
Revised: Helen Clark (Prime Minister) and Don Brash (Leader of the Opposition) have gone head-to-head in the first live televised debate between the two leaders in the New Zealand general election of 2005.
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Original:  The debate ran through : tax, race relations, foreign affairs, immigration, education and health ( All of the key policies areas).
Revised:  The debate ran through tax, race relations, foreign affairs, immigration, education and health ( All of the key policies areas).
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Original:  The debate ran through : tax, race relations, foreign affairs, immigration, education and health ( All of the key policies areas).
Revised:  The debate ran through : tax, race relations, foreign affairs, immigration, education and health ( all the key policy areas).
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Original:  Tax was top of the agenda;
Revised:  Taxes were at the top of the agenda;
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Original:  the debate was just hours after National released their tax policy.
Revised:  the debate was just hours after the National Party released their tax policy.
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Original: The man know as just the 'Piano Man' has left the hospital  he was staying at returned home to his native Germany.
Revised: The man know as just the 'Piano Man' has left the hospital where he was staying at returned home to his native Germany.
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Original: The man know as just the 'Piano Man' has left the hospital  he was staying at returned home to his native Germany.
Revised: The man know as just the 'Piano Man' has left the hospital he was staying and has returned home to his native Germany.
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Original:  It turns out, according to British tabloid The Daily Mirror that the man, a 20-year old gay , was from Germany but after losing his job in Paris, he went over to the UK through the Channel Tunnel.
Revised:  It turns out, according to British tabloid The Daily Mirror that the man, a 20-year old homosexual , was from Germany but after losing his job in Paris, he went over to the UK through the Channel Tunnel.
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Original:  He was going to commit suicide when  found by police on a Kent beach.
Revised:  He was going to commit suicide when he was found by police on a Kent beach.
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Original:  It appears that he used to work with mental patients and copied what he saw from them to fool the doctors.
Revised:  It appears that he had formerly worked with mental patients and copied what he saw from them to fool the doctors.
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Original:  Also according to the Mirror, the man was only able to only able to tap the same key repetadly  , but hosptial officals refute this.
Revised:  Also according to the Mirror, the man was only able to tap the same key repetadly , but hosptial officals refute this.
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Original:  The man was found soaking wet on beach in Kent in a expensive-looking suit which had all labels cut out of it . Some people believed he was suffering from post-traumatic stress disorder or that he was an autistic savant.
Revised:  The man was found soaking wet on beach in Kent in a expensive-looking suit from which all the labels had been removed . Some people believed he was suffering from post-traumatic stress disorder or that he was an autistic savant.
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Original:  They also believed he was a Canadian eccentric, a French busker, a student from Norway, and Czech concert pianist Tomas Strnad
Revised:  Some also believed he was a Canadian eccentric, a French busker, a student from Norway, and Czech concert pianist Tomas Strnad
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Original:  They also believed he was a Canadian eccentric, a French busker, a student from Norway, and Czech concert pianist Tomas Strnad
Revised:  They also believed he was a Canadian eccentric, a French busker, a student from Norway, or Czech concert pianist Tomas Strnad
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Original: It turns out, according to British tabloid The Daily Mirror that the man, a 20-year old homosexual, was from Germany but after losing his job in Paris, he went over to the UK through the Channel Tunnel.
Revised: It turns out, according to British tabloid The Daily Mirror that the man, a 20-year old homosexual, was from Germany but after losing his job in Paris, traveled to the UK through the Channel Tunnel.
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Original:  He refused to talk to them due to his distressted state.
Revised:  He refused to talk to authorities due to his distressted state.
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Original: He refused to talk to authorities due to his distressted state.
Revised: He refused to talk to authorities due to his distressed state.
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Original:  Also according to the Mirror, the man was only able to tap the same key repetadly at the piano, but hosptial officals refute this.
Revised:  Also according to the Mirror, the man was only able to tap the same key repeatedly at the piano, but hosptial officals refute this.
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Original:  Also according to the Mirror, the man was only able to tap the same key repetadly at the piano, but hosptial officals refute this.
Revised:  Also according to the Mirror, the man was only able to tap the same key repetadly at the piano, but hospital officials refute this.
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Original:  The man was found soaking wet on beach in Kent in a expensive-looking suit from which all the labels had been removed.
Revised:  The man was found soaking wet on beach in Kent in an expensive-looking suit from which all the labels had been removed.
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Original: The man know as just the 'Piano Man' has left the hospital where he was staying and has returned home to his native Germany.
Revised: The man known as just the 'Piano Man' has left the hospital where he was staying and has returned home to his native Germany.
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Original:  It turns out, according to British tabloid The Daily Mirror  that the man, a 20-year old homosexual, was from Germany but after losing his job in Paris, traveled to the UK through the Channel Tunnel.
Revised:  It turns out, according to British tabloid The Daily Mirror , that the man, a 20-year old homosexual, was from Germany but after losing his job in Paris, traveled to the UK through the Channel Tunnel.
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Original:  Also according to the Mirror, the man was only able to tap the same key repeatedly at the piano , but hospital officials refute this.
Revised:  Also according to the Mirror, the man was only able to tap the same piano key repeatedly , but hospital officials refute this.
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Original:  However, all of this has come from an unidentified source.
Revised:  However, all of this information came from a single, unidentified source.
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Original:  The man was found soaking wet on  beach in Kent in an expensive-looking suit from which all the labels had been removed.
Revised:  The man was found soaking wet on a beach in Kent in an expensive-looking suit from which all the labels had been removed.
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Original: It turns out, according to British tabloid The Daily Mirror, that the man, a 20-year old homosexual , was from Germany but after losing his job in Paris, traveled to the UK through the Channel Tunnel.
Revised: It turns out, according to British tabloid The Daily Mirror, that the man, aged 20 , was from Germany but after losing his job in Paris, traveled to the UK through the Channel Tunnel.
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Original: \ French oil company Total S.A announced that it has stopped shipping petroleum products to Iran.
Revised:  French oil company Total S.A announced that it has stopped shipping petroleum products to Iran.
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Original: "Richard and Cynthia Murphy" (Montclair, New Jersey) Vicky Paleaz (Yonkers, New York) "Juan Lazaro" (Yonkers, New York) Anna Chapman (Manhattan, New York City) Mikhail Zemenko (Arlington, Virginia) "Michael Zottoli" and "Patricia Mills" (Arlington, Virginia) "Donald Howard Heathfield" and "Tracy Lee Ann Foley" (Boston, Massachusetts) Another alleged spy, "Christopher R. Metsos , " remains at large.
Revised: "Richard and Cynthia Murphy" (Montclair, New Jersey) Vicky Paleaz (Yonkers, New York) "Juan Lazaro" (Yonkers, New York) Anna Chapman (Manhattan, New York City) Mikhail Zemenko (Arlington, Virginia) "Michael Zottoli" and "Patricia Mills" (Arlington, Virginia) "Donald Howard Heathfield" and "Tracy Lee Ann Foley" (Boston, Massachusetts) "Christopher R. Metsos , " remains at large.
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Original: "Richard and Cynthia Murphy" (Montclair, New Jersey) Vicky Paleaz (Yonkers, New York) "Juan Lazaro" (Yonkers, New York) Anna Chapman (Manhattan, New York City) Mikhail Zemenko (Arlington, Virginia) "Michael Zottoli" and "Patricia Mills" (Arlington, Virginia) "Donald Howard Heathfield" and "Tracy Lee Ann Foley" (Boston, Massachusetts) Another alleged spy, "Christopher R. Metsos , " remains at large.
Revised: "Richard and Cynthia Murphy" (Montclair, New Jersey) Vicky Paleaz (Yonkers, New York) "Juan Lazaro" (Yonkers, New York) Anna Chapman (Manhattan, New York City) Mikhail Zemenko (Arlington, Virginia) "Michael Zottoli" and "Patricia Mills" (Arlington, Virginia) "Donald Howard Heathfield" and "Tracy Lee Ann Foley" (Boston, Massachusetts) Another alleged spy, "Christopher R. Metsos " remains at large.
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Original:  All except Metsos are currently in custody awaiting a preliminary hearing scheduled for July 27
Revised:  A preliminary hearing is scheduled for July 27
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Original:  The vote however, has been delayed three more days to  win the support of the Sunni minority.
Revised:  The vote however, has been delayed three more days to try to win the support of the Sunni minority.
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Original: A draft of Iraq's constitution has entered parliment, dispite warnings from Sunni Arabs that it could begin a civil war.
Revised: A draft of Iraq's constitution has entered parliment, despite warnings from Sunni Arabs that it could begin a civil war.
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Original: A draft of Iraq's  constitution has entered parliament, despite warnings from Sunni Arabs that it could begin a civil war.
Revised: A draft of Iraq's proposed constitution has entered parliament, despite warnings from Sunni Arabs that it could begin a civil war.
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Original:  Other concerns which prevent Sunni support of the draft constitution center on the emphasis given to Islam as a "main source of law" -- a compromise between Islamist and secular Shi'ites and Kurds  
Revised:  Other concerns which prevent Sunni support of the draft constitution center on the emphasis given to Islam as a "main source of law" -- a compromise between Islamist and secular Shi'ites and Kurds . 
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Original:  Other concerns which prevent Sunni support of the draft constitution center on the emphasis given to Islam as a "main source of law" -- a compromise between Islamist and secular Shi'ites and Kurds.
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Original: Signs indicate little chance of a resolution to the Sunni oppostion , however.
Revised: Signs indicate little chance of a resolution to the Sunni opposition , however.
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Original:  "If it passes, there will be an uprising in the streets," Saleh al-Mutlak, a Sunni negotiator working on the constition said.
Revised:  "If it passes, there will be an uprising in the streets," Saleh al-Mutlak, a Sunni negotiator working on the constitution said.
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Original:  Sunnis are concerned over sections of the constitution that create large "federal" regions in the north and the south under Shi'ite and Kurdish control.
Revised:  Sunnis are concerned over sections of the constitution that create large "federal" regions in the north and the south under Shi'ite and control.
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Original:  "Even though ASIO have identified it as a risk coming to Sydney, they can be guaranteed the best policing resources available in this country to hold their conference in a safe environment, but to do so they should have been asked to pay their way, to pay the bill," he said   .
Revised:  "Even though ASIO have identified it as a risk coming to Sydney, they can be guaranteed the best policing resources available in this country to hold their conference in a safe environment, but to do so they should have been asked to pay their way, to pay the bill," he said . .
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Original:  A number of reasons have been given for the protest, including the w: Iraq War, globalisation, and the governments planned industrial relations changes.
Revised:  A number of reasons have been given for the protest, including the Iraq War, globalisation, and the governments planned industrial relations changes.
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Original:  A number of reasons have been given for the protest, including the Iraq War, globalisation, and the governments planned industrial relations changes.
Revised:  A number of reasons have been given for the protest, including the Iraq War, globalisation, and the government's planned industrial relations changes.
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Original:  The decision has been criticised by the NSW Police Association, as they claim it will leave inner city stations short staffed .
Revised:  The decision has been criticised by the NSW Police Association, as they claim it will leave inner city stations short-staffed .
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Original:  The opposition police spokesman Mike Gallacher echoed the Associations criticism, saying that the conference organisers should foot the bill themselves.
Revised:  The opposition police spokesman Mike Gallacher echoed the Association's criticism, saying that the conference organisers should foot the bill themselves.
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Original:  New South Wales Premier Morris Iemma defended the use of taxpayers  money on policing the conference.
Revised:  New South Wales Premier Morris Iemma defended the use of taxpayers ' money on policing the conference.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Even though ASIO have identified it as a risk coming to Sydney, they can be guaranteed the best policing resources available in this country to hold their conference in a safe environment, but to do so they should have been asked to pay their way, to pay the bill," he said.
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Original:  A spokesman for the Police Minister said that frontline policing would not be affected.
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