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Original: The  American Library Association's, Berkman Center for Internet and Society and the  Shorenstein Center on the Press, Politics and Public Policy opened their Blogging,Journalism and Credibility: Battleground and Common Ground conference today at Harvard's Kennedy School of Government in Cambridge, Massachusetts, U. S.A. The invitation-only conference sought to " bring together a select group of thoughtful bloggers and journalists".
Revised: The American Library Association's, Berkman Center for Internet and Society and the Shorenstein Center on the Press, Politics and Public Policy . " bring together a select group of thoughtful bloggers and journalists".
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Original:  ] Addressing the question of credibility, both in mainstream media and in the  "blogosphere", is one of the goals of this conference.
Revised:  with blogs] Addressing the question of credibility, both in mainstream media and in the "blogosphere", is one of the goals of this conference.
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Original:  ] Addressing the question of credibility, both in mainstream media and in the  "blogosphere", is one of the goals of this conference.
Revised:  ] Addressing the question of credibility, both in mainstream media and in the "blogosphere", is one of the goals of the conference.
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Original:  Corporate media has itself flirted with, disputed with , and been directly affected by bloggers.
Revised:  Corporate media has flirted with, disputed with , and been directly affected by bloggers.
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Original:  Corporate media has itself flirted with, disputed with , and been directly affected by bloggers.
Revised:  Corporate media has itself flirted with, disputed , and been directly affected by bloggers.
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Original:  What the future interactions between the new blogging media and more mainstream mediaare scheduled for discussion.
Revised:  What the future interactions between the new , blogging media, and mainstream media and more mainstream mediaare scheduled for discussion.
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Original:  What the future interactions between the new blogging media and more mainstream mediaare scheduled for discussion.
Revised:  What the future interactions between the new blogging media , provide topics for discussion.
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Original:  "One of the problems with blogs%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ," said Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc., "is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
Revised:  with blogs%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ," said Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc., "is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
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Original:  "One of the problems with blogs%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ," said Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc., "is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
Revised:  "One of the problems %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ," said Dan Gillmor of Grassroots Media Inc., "is that any random website can look as good as any other website.
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Original:  The attendees and speakers included both established and new media names, academics and professionals  and amateurs.
Revised:  Attendees and speakers included both established and new media names, academics and professionals and amateurs.
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Original:  The attendees and speakers included both established and new media names, academics and professionals  and amateurs.
Revised:  The attendees and speakers included both established and new media names, academics and professionals , and amateurs.
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Original:  Topics covered ranged from jargon and terminology  through business models  and on to podcasting and vlogging.
Revised:  Topics covered ranged from jargon and terminology , through business models and on to podcasting and vlogging.
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Original:  Topics covered ranged from jargon and terminology  through business models  and on to podcasting and vlogging.
Revised:  Topics covered ranged from jargon and terminology through business models , and on to podcasting and vlogging.
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Original:   The conference wound up with a session covering issues identified during the conference and an open session of free-ranging discussion
Revised:  UPDATE: The conference wound up with a session covering issues identified during the conference and an open session of free-ranging discussion
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Original:  Costello's comments targeting Muslim extremists, support from John Howard, have been branded "extremely divisive" and a blot on Australia's international reputation.
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Original:  Mr Costello particularly singled out Muslims in his remarks, saying those who advocate extremism should move to countries where they feel more comfortable.
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Original:  Politicians from all sides have leapt on the remarks and many from the Islamic community say they're offended by the comments .
Revised:  Politicians from all sides have leapt on the remarks and many from the Islamic community say they're offended by the comments 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Peter Costello's comments are divisive, arrogant, provocative and do nothing to unite the nation at a time when responsible leadership on this issue is called for," ECCV chairman Phong Nguyen said.
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Original: UNDER DEVELOPMENT Australian Federal treasurer Peter Costello, favourite to become the country’s next Prime Minister, has called for Muslim extremists to be stripped of their citizenship.
Revised:  Australian Federal treasurer Peter Costello, favourite to become the country’s next Prime Minister, has called for Muslim extremists to be stripped of their citizenship.
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Original:  " ... To have the leaders of our nation, such at the Prime Minister and Treasurer, making gratuitous comments about race and religion based on ill-founded perceptions rather than facts, is extremely divisive and will harm Australia nationally and internationally."
Revised:  " To have the leaders of our nation, such at the Prime Minister and Treasurer, making gratuitous comments about race and religion based on ill-founded perceptions rather than facts, is extremely divisive and will harm Australia nationally and internationally."
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Original:                      LATELINE: You seem to be suggesting that anti-Americanism is in fact a dangerous thing for Australians.
Revised:  "Rather than try to promote understanding and harmony in this society, his comments are highly divisive and he is stirring up Islamophobia, and these comments should really be beneath any decent politician." LATELINE: You seem to be suggesting that anti-Americanism is in fact a dangerous thing for Australians.
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Original:  Politicians from all sides have leapt on the remarks and many from the Islamic community say they're offended by the comments.
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Original:  Mr Costello made a public call for Muslims who want to live under sharia law to find another country, while also referring to "mushy multiculturalism".
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Justin Li, vice chair of the NSW Ethnic Communities' Council, said Mr Costello's comments had deliberately and unfairly targeted Muslims.
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Original:  Well if he wants to do something about it, if he wants to prevent people of a jihadist mind coming into this country, let him ensure that that happens." language Malcolm Thomas from the Islamic Foundation of Victoria says it's the fact that Mr Costello singled out Muslims.
Revised:  Well if he wants to do something about it, if he wants to prevent people of a jihadist mind coming into this country, let him ensure that that happens." Malcolm Thomas from the Islamic Foundation of Victoria says it's the fact that Mr Costello singled out Muslims.
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Original:  Well if he wants to do something about it, if he wants to prevent people of a jihadist mind coming into this country, let him ensure that that happens." language Malcolm Thomas from the Islamic Foundation of Victoria says it's the fact that Mr Costello singled out Muslims.
Revised:  Well if he wants to do something about it, if he wants to prevent people of a jihadist mind coming into this country, let him ensure that that happens." language 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mr Thomas also points out that the suggestion to strip people of citizenship has limited potential, given that a third of Muslims living here were born here.
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Original:  "Ultimately, however, it is important that they know that there is only one law and it is going to be enforced whether they acknowledge its legitimacy or not ." TREASURER Peter Costello is promoting division and Islamophobia in remarks about Muslims and should be censured, a Muslim community leader said.
Revised:  "Ultimately, however, it is important that they know that there is only one law and it is going to be enforced whether they acknowledge its legitimacy or not TREASURER Peter Costello is promoting division and Islamophobia in remarks about Muslims and should be censured, a Muslim community leader said.
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Original:  "Ultimately, however, it is important that they know that there is only one law and it is going to be enforced whether they acknowledge its legitimacy or not ." TREASURER Peter Costello is promoting division and Islamophobia in remarks about Muslims and should be censured, a Muslim community leader said.
Revised:  "Ultimately, however, it is important that they know that there is only one law and it is going to be enforced whether they acknowledge its legitimacy or not ." 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Keysar Trad, president of the Islamic Friendship Association of Australia, said today he genuinely hoped Prime Minister John Howard would censure Mr Costello.
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Original:  Mr Costello delivered a speech yesterday in which he said if people wanted to live under Islamic sharia law, they should move to another country.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "There is one law we are all expected to abide by," the Treasurer said.
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Original:  "It is the law enacted by the parliament under the Australian constitution.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "If you can't accept that, then you don't accept the fundamentals of what Australia is and what it stands for."
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Original:  Mr Trad said nobody was protesting Australia's secular laws through any other means than the normal democratic process.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "We have not asked for sharia law to be imposed," he told ABC radio.
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Original:  "I don't know anyone in this country who is asking for sharia law to be imposed and I don't known anyone in this country who has rejected the rule of law.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "I am genuinely hopeful that the prime minister will censure the treasurer over these ridiculous comments, that the treasurer is grossly out of line.
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Original:  "Rather than try to promote understanding and harmony in this society, his comments are highly divisive and he is stirring up Islamophobia, and these comments should really be beneath any decent politician."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In his speech, Mr Costello said where there was reason to believe people were not truthfully or honestly meeting their citizenship test, there was every right for them to be denied citizenship.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In his speech, Mr Costello said where there was reason to believe people were not truthfully or honestly meeting their citizenship test, there was every right for them to be denied citizenship.
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Original:  "Rather than try to promote understanding and harmony in this society, his comments are highly divisive and he is stirring up Islamophobia, and these comments should really be beneath any decent politician."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In his speech, Mr Costello said where there was reason to believe people were not truthfully or honestly meeting their citizenship test, there was every right for them to be denied citizenship.
Revised:  "Rather than try to promote understanding and harmony in this society, his comments are highly divisive and he is stirring up Islamophobia, and these comments should really be beneath any decent politician."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  "If by subsequent conduct they show that they don't meet the test then we could invite them to forfeit their Australian citizenship," he said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Now you can only do this if they have another citizenship ."
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Original: Peter Costello is promoting division and Islamophobia in remarks about Muslims and should be censured , a Muslim community leader said.
Revised: Peter Costello is promoting division and Islamophobia and should be censured , a Muslim community leader said.
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Original: Peter Costello is promoting division and Islamophobia in remarks about Muslims and should be censured , a Muslim community leader said.
Revised: Peter Costello is promoting division and Islamophobia in remarks about Muslims and should be censured .
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Original:  Keysar Trad, president of the Islamic Friendship Association of Australia, said today he genuinely hoped Prime Minister John Howard would censure Mr Costello.
Revised:  Keysar Trad, president of the Islamic Friendship Association of Australia, has said he genuinely hoped Prime Minister John Howard would censure Mr Costello.
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Original:  Keysar Trad, president of the Islamic Friendship Association of Australia, said today he genuinely hoped Prime Minister John Howard would censure Mr Costello.
Revised:  Keysar Trad, president of the Islamic Friendship Association of Australia, said today he genuinely hoped the Prime Minister would censure Mr Costello.
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Original:  Mr Costello delivered a speech yesterday in which he said if people wanted to live under Islamic sharia law, they should move to another country.
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Original:  "There is one law we are all expected to abide by," the Treasurer said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "It is the law enacted by the parliament under the Australian constitution.
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Original:  "If you can't accept that, then you don't accept the fundamentals of what Australia is and what it stands for."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mr Trad said nobody was protesting Australia's secular laws through any other means than the normal democratic process.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mr Trad said nobody was protesting Australia's secular laws through any other means than the normal democratic process.
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Original:  "If you can't accept that, then you don't accept the fundamentals of what Australia is and what it stands for."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mr Trad said nobody was protesting Australia's secular laws through any other means than the normal democratic process.
Revised:  "If you can't accept that, then you don't accept the fundamentals of what Australia is and what it stands for."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Trad said nobody was protesting Australia's secular laws through any other means than the normal democratic process.
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Original:  " I am genuinely hopeful that the prime minister will censure the treasurer over these ridiculous comments, that the treasurer is grossly out of line.
Revised:  I am genuinely hopeful that the prime minister will censure the treasurer over these ridiculous comments, that the treasurer is grossly out of line.
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Original:  "Now you can only do this if they have another citizenship." LATELINE: You seem to be suggesting that anti-Americanism is in fact a dangerous thing for Australians.
Revised:  "Now you can only do this if they have another citizenship." 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Costello: "You don't have to swear at the football and eat a pie to be an Australian, but you do have to believe in democracy, the rule of law and the rights and liberties of others."
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Original:  Mr El Ayoubi  "If you've come to this country, you've come to this country to live under a democratic system and you've come into this country to abide by the rules, the principles and the values of this country, and you should do that."
Revised:  Mr El Ayoubi said: "If you've come to this country, you've come to this country to live under a democratic system and you've come into this country to abide by the rules, the principles and the values of this country, and you should do that."
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Original:  ANYONE who believes Islamic sharia law can co-exist with Australian law should move to a country where they feel more comfortable, Treasurer Peter Costello said today.
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Original:  Mr Costellowas giving a speech on the meaning of Australian citizenship to the Sydney Institute.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "There is one law we are all expected to abide by, " Mr Costello said.
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Original:  "It is the law enacted by the Parliament under the Australian Constitution.
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Original:  Mr Costello, the son of a Methodist lay preacher and who was raised a Baptist, emphasised that Australia is a secular state under which the freedom of all religions is protected.
Revised:  Mr Costello, the son of a Methodist lay preacher and who was raised a Baptist, emphasised that Australia is a secular state under which the freedom of all religions is protected.
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Original:  "There are countries that apply religious or sharia law – Saudi Arabia and Iran come to mind.
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Original:  " If a person wants to live under sharia law these are countries where they might feel at ease.
Revised:  If a person wants to live under sharia law these are countries where they might feel at ease.
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Original:  " But not Australia."
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Original:  It was more difficult for those born in Australia or who had no dual citizenship, Mr Costello said.
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Original:  "In these cases, we have on our hands citizens who are apparently so alienated that they do not support what their country stands for," he said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Such alienation could become a threat to the rights and liberties of others.
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Original:  "And so it is important to explain our values, explain why they are important and engage leadership they respect to assist us in this process.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Ultimately, however, it is important that they know that there is only one law and it is going to be enforced whether they acknowledge its legitimacy or not."
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Original:  PETER Costello has lashed out at "mushy misguided multiculturalism," warning that Australian values are "not optional" — and that migrants who do not share them should be stripped of their citizenship. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a hard-hitting speech to the Sydney Institute that immediately sparked anger from Muslims, the Treasurer said migrants should be forced to honour their pledge of allegiance to Australia or face the prospect of being kicked out.
Revised:  PIn his speech Mr Costello lashed out at "mushy misguided multiculturalism," warning that Australian values are "not optional" — and that migrants who do not share them should be stripped of their citizenship. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a hard-hitting speech to the Sydney Institute that immediately sparked anger from Muslims, the Treasurer said migrants should be forced to honour their pledge of allegiance to Australia or face the prospect of being kicked out.
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Original:  PETER Costello has lashed out at "mushy misguided multiculturalism," warning that Australian values are "not optional" — and that migrants who do not share them should be stripped of their citizenship. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a hard-hitting speech to the Sydney Institute that immediately sparked anger from Muslims, the Treasurer said migrants should be forced to honour their pledge of allegiance to Australia or face the prospect of being kicked out.
Revised:  PETER Costello has lashed out at "mushy misguided multiculturalism," warning that Australian values are "not optional" — and that migrants who do not share them should be stripped of their citizenship. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  In his strongest comments on the issue yet, he said anyone refusing to acknowledge the rule of law "stabs at the heart of the Australian compact".
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Those who are outside this compact threaten the rights and liberties of others," Mr Costello said . "They should be refused citizenship if they apply for it.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mr Costello said . "They should be refused citizenship if they apply for it.
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Original:  Mr Costello said the citizenship pledge should be "a big flashing warning sign" to Muslims wanting to live under sharia law.
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Original:  People will not respect citizenship that explains itself on the basis of "mushy multiculturalism," Mr Costello said . "We are more likely to engender respect by emphasising the expectation and the obligations that the great privilege of citizenship brings."
Revised:  Mr Costello said . "We are more likely to engender respect by emphasising the expectation and the obligations that the great privilege of citizenship brings."
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Original:  People will not respect citizenship that explains itself on the basis of "mushy multiculturalism," Mr Costello said . "We are more likely to engender respect by emphasising the expectation and the obligations that the great privilege of citizenship brings."
Revised:  People will not respect citizenship that explains itself on the basis of "mushy multiculturalism," Mr Costello said "We are more likely to engender respect by emphasising the expectation and the obligations that the great privilege of citizenship brings."
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Original:  People will not respect citizenship that explains itself on the basis of "mushy multiculturalism," Mr Costello said . "We are more likely to engender respect by emphasising the expectation and the obligations that the great privilege of citizenship brings."
Revised:  People will not respect citizenship that explains itself on the basis of "mushy multiculturalism," Mr Costello said . 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mr Costello said he had attended an Australia day citizenship ceremony at the Stonnington Town Hall in his electorate of Higgins during which a state MP "extolled the virtues of multiculturalism".
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% he had attended an Australia day citizenship ceremony at the Stonnington Town Hall in his electorate of Higgins during which a state MP "extolled the virtues of multiculturalism".
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