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Original:  A team arrived Tuesday travel to Maldives to take charge of the debris, which had previously been disposed of as trash.
Revised:  A team arrived Tuesday in Maldives to take charge of the debris, which had previously been disposed of as trash.
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Original:  MH370, while flying from  , Malaysia to  , China, vanished on March 8, 2014.
Revised:  MH370, while flying from Kuala Lumpur , Malaysia to , China, vanished on March 8, 2014.
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Original:  The move means the end of rival company AT&T's status as the only official US carrier of the iPhone, a status it held since the first iPhone debuted  four years ago   
Revised:  The move means the end of rival company AT&T's status as the only official US carrier of the iPhone, a status it held since the first iPhone debuted about four years ago 
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Original:  The move means the end of rival company AT&T's status as the only official US carrier of the iPhone, a status it held since the first iPhone debuted  four years ago   
Revised:  The move means the end of rival company AT&T's status as the only official US carrier of the iPhone, a status it held since the first iPhone debuted four years ago . 
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Original: The press conference, held in New York City, was hosted by Verizon 's president , Lowell McAdam, and its CEO, Dan Mead.
Revised: The press conference, held in New York City, was hosted by Verizon president Lowell McAdam, and its CEO, Dan Mead.
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Original: The press conference, held in New York City, was hosted by Verizon president Lowell McAdam,  chief operating officer  Tim Cook, and  chief executive officer  Dan Mead.
Revised: The press conference, held in New York City, was hosted by Verizon 's president, Lowell McAdam, chief operating officer Tim Cook, and chief executive officer Dan Mead.
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Original: The press conference, held in New York City, was hosted by Verizon president Lowell McAdam,  chief operating officer  Tim Cook, and  chief executive officer  Dan Mead.
Revised: The press conference, held in New York City, was hosted by Verizon president Lowell McAdam, chief operating officer , Tim Cook, and chief executive officer Dan Mead.
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Original: The press conference, held in New York City, was hosted by Verizon president Lowell McAdam,  chief operating officer  Tim Cook, and  chief executive officer  Dan Mead.
Revised: The press conference, held in New York City, was hosted by Verizon president Lowell McAdam, chief operating officer Tim Cook, and chief executive officer , Dan Mead.
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Original: The original iPhone 4 In a Tuesday media event, Verizon Wireless announced it had reached an agreement with Apple Inc. and would begin selling a CDMA version of the iPhone 4 beginning early February.
Revised: The original iPhone 4 On Tuesday in a media event, Verizon Wireless announced it had reached an agreement with Apple Inc. and would begin selling a CDMA version of the iPhone 4 beginning early February.
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Original:  However, Verizon's iPhone 4 allows the user to create a personal Wi-Fi hotspot, which means up to five other wireless devices can connect to the Internet through the phone.
Revised:  However, Verizon's iPhone 4 allows the user to create a personal Wi-Fi hotspot, which means up to five other wireless devices can be connected to the Internet through the phone.
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Original: Bloomberg explained the meaning of the preemptive announcement by stating: “ We recognize that we did not do the job that New Yorkers rightly expect of us in the last storm.
Revised: Bloomberg explained the meaning of the preemptive announcement by stating: " We recognize that we did not do the job that New Yorkers rightly expect of us in the last storm.
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Original:  ” Despite declaring an emergency, the mayor said the city would not make the decision to close public schools until 5 AM.
Revised:  " Despite declaring an emergency, the mayor said the city would not make the decision to close public schools until 5 AM.
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Original:  The New York City Housing Authority announced on their Twitter page, “ Turn a snow day into a payday.
Revised:  The New York City Housing Authority announced on their Twitter page, " Turn a snow day into a payday.
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Original:  ” The linked page offered $12 an hour to shovel snow for the city
Revised:  " The linked page offered $12 an hour to shovel snow for the city
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Original: Mayor Michael R. Bloomberg  Mayor Michael R. Bloomberg announced a weather emergency tonight in New York City, New York.
Revised: Mayor Michael R. Bloomberg Mayor Michael R. Bloomberg announced a weather emergency in New York City, New York.
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Original: This incident is on top of the illegal detention of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen who was accidentally imprisoned in an detention centre when the immigration department suspected her of being an illegal immigrant.
Revised: This incident is on top of the illegal detention of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen who was accidentally imprisoned in a detention centre when the immigration department suspected her of being an illegal immigrant.
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Original:  Some senior officials are being investigated on this issue, however, the Ministers responsible for the Deparment -- now Senator Amanda Vanstone, but prior to October 2003 it was Phillip Ruddock -- denied any responsibility.
Revised:  Some senior officials are being investigated on this issue, however, the ministers responsible for the Deparment -- now Senator Amanda Vanstone, but prior to October 2003 it was Phillip Ruddock -- denied any responsibility.
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Original:  Some senior officials are being investigated on this issue, however, the Ministers responsible for the Deparment -- now Senator Amanda Vanstone, but prior to October 2003 it was Phillip Ruddock -- denied any responsibility.
Revised:  Some senior officials are being investigated on this issue, however, the Ministers responsible for the Department -- now Senator Amanda Vanstone, but prior to October 2003 it was Phillip Ruddock -- denied any responsibility.
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Original:  Some senior officials are being investigated on this issue, however, the Ministers responsible for the Deparment -- now Senator Amanda Vanstone, but prior to October 2003 it was Phillip Ruddock -- denied any responsibility.
Revised:  Some senior officials are being investigated on this issue, however, the Ministers responsible for the Deparment -- now Amanda Vanstone, but prior to October 2003 it was Phillip Ruddock -- denied any responsibility.
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Original:  Ms Solon was shipped off despite being severly injured after an accident (just before she was found)  while her children waited to be picked up from school.
Revised:  Ms Solon was shipped off despite being severly injured after an accident (just before she was found) , while her children waited to be picked up from school.
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Original:  Vivian was shipped out in March 2001, but the mistake was not officially recognised until April 2005.
Revised:  The mistake was not officially recognised until April 2005.
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Original:  Senior officials knew of the mistake in July 2003  but neglected to act to correct it.
Revised:  Senior officials knew of the mistake in July 2003 , but neglected to act to correct it.
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Original:  Senior officials knew of the mistake in July 2003  but neglected to act to correct it.
Revised:  Senior officials knew of the mistake in July 2003 but neglected to correct it.
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Original:  In the end  it was only through the efforts of her former husband (Robert Young) , who persistently pursued her case , that it was eventually acted on.
Revised:  In the end , it was only through the efforts of her former husband (Robert Young) , who persistently pursued her case , that it was eventually acted on.
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Original:  In the end  it was only through the efforts of her former husband (Robert Young) , who persistently pursued her case , that it was eventually acted on.
Revised:  In the end it was only through the efforts of her former husband , Robert Young , who persistently pursued her case , that it was eventually acted on.
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Original:  In the end  it was only through the efforts of her former husband (Robert Young) , who persistently pursued her case , that it was eventually acted on.
Revised:  In the end it was only through the efforts of her former husband (Robert Young) , who persistently pursued her case that it was eventually acted on.
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Original:  When asked if he felt any responsibility Mr Ruddock answered "No, none at all ".
Revised:  When asked if he felt any responsibility Mr Ruddock answered "No, none at all ."
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Original:  Ms Solon was deported in March 2001 despite being severly injured after an accident (just before she was found), while her children waited to be picked up from school.
Revised:  Ms Solon was deported in March 2001 despite being severly injured after an accident (just before she was found), while her child waited to be picked up from school.
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Original: An independent investigation ( headed by former Victorian Police Commissioner , Neil Comrie) has revealed that Australian immigration department officials wrongfully deported the Australian citizen Vivian Solon to the Philipines.
Revised: An independent investigation , headed by former Victorian Police Commissioner , Neil Comrie) has revealed that Australian immigration department officials wrongfully deported the Australian citizen Vivian Solon to the Philipines.
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Original: An independent investigation ( headed by former Victorian Police Commissioner , Neil Comrie) has revealed that Australian immigration department officials wrongfully deported the Australian citizen Vivian Solon to the Philipines.
Revised: An independent investigation ( headed by former Victorian Police Commissioner Neil Comrie, has revealed that Australian immigration department officials wrongfully deported the Australian citizen Vivian Solon to the Philipines.
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Original:  This incident is on top of the illegal detention of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen who was accidentally imprisoned in a detention centre when the immigration department suspected her of being an illegal immigrant.
Revised:  This incident is on top of the illegal detention of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen , was accidentally imprisoned in a detention centre when the immigration department suspected her of being an illegal immigrant.
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Original:  The report indicates that 20 other Australian citizens have also been falsely imprisoned by the immigration department
Revised:  The report indicates that 20 other Australian citizens have also been unjustly imprisoned by the immigration department
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Original: An independent investigation, headed by former Victorian Police Commissioner Neil Comrie, has revealed that Australian immigration department officials wrongfully deported the Australian citizen Vivian Solon to the Philipines .
Revised: An independent investigation, headed by former Victorian Police Commissioner Neil Comrie, has revealed that Australian immigration department officials wrongfully deported the Australian citizen Vivian Solon to the Philippines .
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Original:  One runway has been taken out of service as a result and delays are expected on all flights.
Revised:  One runway has been closed as a result and delays are expected on all flights.
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Original:  One runway has been taken out of service as a result and delays are expected on all flights.
Revised:  One runway has been taken out of service as a result . Delays are expected on all flights.
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Original:  Schiphol Airport is  one of Europe's largest hubs and is Amsterdam's primary airport
Revised:  Schiphol Airport is Amsterdam's primary airport and one of Europe's largest hubs and is Amsterdam's primary airport
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Original:  Schiphol Airport is  one of Europe's largest hubs and is Amsterdam's primary airport
Revised:  Schiphol Airport is one of Europe's largest hubs 
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Original: An unexploded World War 2 bomb has been discovered at Schiphol airport in Amsterdam, the Netherlands.
Revised: An unexploded World War II bomb has been discovered at Schiphol airport in Amsterdam, the Netherlands.
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Original:  Heavy fog has compounded the problem and is expected to cause further delays      .
Revised:  Heavy fog has compounded the problem and is expected to cause further delays . .
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Original: An unexploded World War II bomb has been discovered at Schiphol airport in Amsterdam, the Netherlands.
Revised: An unexploded World War II bomb has been discovered at Schiphol Airport in Amsterdam, the Netherlands.
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Original:  Earlier this year in April, three fishermen were killed when their ship exploded from hauling an old bomb onboard that had been caught in the net . Schiphol Airport is Amsterdam's primary airport and one of Europe's largest hubs
Revised:  Earlier this year in April, three fishermen were killed when their ship exploded from hauling an old bomb onboard that had been caught in the net Schiphol Airport is Amsterdam's primary airport and one of Europe's largest hubs
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Original:  Earlier this year in April, three fishermen were killed when their ship exploded from hauling an old bomb onboard that had been caught in the net . Schiphol Airport is Amsterdam's primary airport and one of Europe's largest hubs
Revised:  Earlier this year in April, three fishermen were killed when their ship exploded from hauling an old bomb onboard that had been caught in the net . 
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Original: The Flag of the IAEA The International Atomic Energy Agency , IAEA , a UN agency and its Director Mohammed ElBaradei have been awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for 2005, the committee's chairman Professor Ole Danbolt Mjøs announced today.
Revised: The Flag of the IAEA The International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) , a UN agency and its Director Mohammed ElBaradei have been awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for 2005, the committee's chairman Professor Ole Danbolt Mjøs announced today.
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Original:  The IAEA, headquartered in Vienna , was established in 1957 and seeks to prevent nuclear proliferation and promotes the peaceful use of nuclear energy.
Revised:  The IAEA, headquartered in Vienna and established in 1957 and seeks to prevent nuclear proliferation and promotes the peaceful use of nuclear energy.
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Original:  The IAEA, headquartered in Vienna , was established in 1957 and seeks to prevent nuclear proliferation and promotes the peaceful use of nuclear energy.
Revised:  The IAEA, headquartered in Vienna , was established in 1957 , seeks to prevent nuclear proliferation and promotes the peaceful use of nuclear energy.
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Original: In the announcement, The Norwegian Nobel Committee emphasizes the role the IAEA plays in preventing nuclear arms prolifiration , and ensuring peaceful use of nuclear energy.
Revised: In the announcement, The Norwegian Nobel Committee emphasizes the role the IAEA plays in preventing nuclear arms proliferation , and ensuring peaceful use of nuclear energy.
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Original:  ]] Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city  , has remained on strike today after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region  
Revised:  ]] Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city , has remained on strike today after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in the region. 
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Original:  ]] Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, has remained on strike today after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in a 16.8 percent, in that region.
Revised:  ]] Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike today after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in a 16.8 percent, in that region.
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Original:  ]]  Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike on Wednesday after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in a 16.8 percent, in that region.
Revised:  ]] The people from Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike on Wednesday after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in a 16.8 percent, in that region.
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Original:  ]] The people from Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike on Wednesday after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in a 16.8 percent, in that region.
Revised:  ]] Persons from Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike on Wednesday after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in a 16.8 percent, in that region.
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Original:  ]] The people from Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike on Wednesday after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in a 16.8 percent, in that region.
Revised:  ]] The people from Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike on Wednesday after President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in a 16.8 percent, in that region.
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Original:  ]] The people from Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike on Wednesday after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of the gas price in a 16.8 percent, in that region.
Revised:  ]] The people from Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike on Wednesday after the Government of President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of gas prices by 16.8 percent, in that region.
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Original:  People from Punta Arenas and politicians are demanding  Piñera to mantain subsidies on natural gas.
Revised:  Persons from Punta Arenas and politicians are demanding Piñera to mantain subsidies on natural gas.
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Original:  People from Punta Arenas and politicians are demanding  Piñera to mantain subsidies on natural gas.
Revised:  People from Punta Arenas and politicians are demanding that Piñera to mantain subsidies on natural gas.
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Original:  People from Punta Arenas and politicians are demanding  Piñera to mantain subsidies on natural gas.
Revised:  People from Punta Arenas and politicians are demanding Piñera maintain subsidies on natural gas.
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Original:  "We want dialogue, to continue talking in a serious and responsible way about the future of Magallanes," Ena von Baer, the government spokeswoman  said on Wednesday morning.
Revised:  "We want dialogue, to continue talking in a serious and responsible way about the future of Magallanes," Ena von Baer, the government spokeswoman , said on Wednesday morning.
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Original:  ]] Persons from Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike on Wednesday after President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of gas prices by 16.8 percent, in that region.
Revised:  ]] Persons from Punta Arenas, Chile, the world's southernmost city and capital of the Magallanes and Antártica Chilena Region, remained on strike Wednesday after Chilean President Sebastián Piñera announced the increase of gas prices by 16.8 percent, in that region.
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Original: A pocket of arctic air finally pushed through , well into the Gulf of Mexico, plunging temperatures across the state into the 50s and 60s.
Revised: A pocket of arctic air finally pushed through well into the Gulf of Mexico, plunging temperatures across the state into the 50s and 60s.
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Original:  Average weekly temperatures should reach steadily lower as the season progresses  
Revised:  Average weekly temperatures should reach steadily lower as the season progresses . 
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Original: United States President Barack Obama appeared at a memorial in Tucson  Wednesday night, in the aftermath of the mass shootingSaturday.
Revised: United States President Barack Obama spoke at a memorial in Tucson Wednesday night, in the aftermath of the mass shootingSaturday.
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Original: United States President Barack Obama appeared at a memorial in Tucson  Wednesday night, in the aftermath of the mass shootingSaturday.
Revised: United States President Barack Obama appeared at a memorial in Tucson , Arizona Wednesday night, in the aftermath of the mass shootingSaturday.
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Original:  During a 33 minute speech, Obama  attempted to begin the 'healing ' processfor the community, urging the nation to move past the event and help forge more civil public discourse.
Revised:  During a 33 minute speech, Obama attempted to begin the "healing process," urging the nation to move past the event and help forge more civil public discourse.
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Original:  During a 33 minute speech, Obama  attempted to begin the 'healing ' processfor the community, urging the nation to move past the event and help forge more civil public discourse.
Revised:  During a 33 minute speech, Obama attempted to begin the 'healing ' processfor the community, urging the nation "to pause for a moment and make sure that we are talking with each other in a way that heals, not a way that wounds."
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Original:  On Saturday, Jared Lee Loughner opened fire on a "Congress on Your Corner" event  , killing six  and injuring thirteen , including US congresswoman Gabrielle Giffords.
Revised:  Jared Lee Loughner opened fire on a "Congress on Your Corner" event , killing six and injuring thirteen , including US congresswoman Gabrielle Giffords.
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Original:  On Saturday, Jared Lee Loughner opened fire on a "Congress on Your Corner" event  , killing six  and injuring thirteen , including US congresswoman Gabrielle Giffords.
Revised:  On Saturday, Jared Lee Loughner opened fire on a "Congress on Your Corner" event , killing six people and injuring thirteen , including US congresswoman Gabrielle Giffords.
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Original:  President Obama visited each of the victim' s families, revealing during his speech that  "Gabby opened her eyes and I can tell you  she knows we are here .
Revised:  President Obama visited each of the victim' s families, revealing during his speech that "Gabby opened her eyes so I can tell you she knows we are here .
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Original:  President Obama visited each of the victim' s families, revealing during his speech that  "Gabby opened her eyes and I can tell you  she knows we are here .
Revised:  President Obama visited each of the victim' s families, revealing during his speech that "Gabby opened her eyes and I can tell you know she knows we are here .
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