wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   Ambassador Stephen Evans escaped injury after a military transport plane he was travelling in caught fire at an airstrip in southern Afghanistan  
Revised:  Ambassador Stephen Evans escaped injury after a military transport plane he was travelling in caught fire at an airstrip in southern Afghanistan . 
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Original: The Australian Labor Party has placed pressure on the federal government to reveal potential sites for any proposed nuclear power plants.
Revised: The Australian Labor Party has placed pressure on the federal government to reveal potential sites for nuclear power plants.
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Original:  Speaking in the Australian House of Representatives on Wednesday, opposition leader Kim Beazley (Brand, Labor) asked Australian treasurer and acting Prime Minister Peter Costello (Higgins, Liberal) to identify potential nuclear sites.
Revised:  Speaking in the Australian House of Representatives on Wednesday, opposition leader Kim Beazley (Brand, Labor) asked Australian treasurer and acting Prime Minister Peter Costello (Higgins, Liberal) to name potential nuclear sites.
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Original:  Mr Costello replied by attacking Labor's policy on limiting Australia to three uranium mines, supporting uranium exports and being opposed to an Australian nuclear enegery industry.
Revised:  Mr Costello replied by attacking Labor's policy on limiting Australia to three uranium mines, supporting uranium exports while being opposed to an Australian nuclear enegery industry.
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Original:  Mr Costello replied by saying that the nuclear debate is an important one for Australia to have .
Revised:  Mr Costello gave no assurances that there were no plans to build a reactor in the region .
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Original:  An an interview whilst in Ireland, Australian PM, John Howard took the opportunity to attack Labor's nuclear policy.
Revised:  During an interview whilst in Ireland, Australian PM, John Howard took the opportunity to attack Labor's nuclear policy.
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Original:  He said that Mr Beazley's opposition was "hypocritical" given that he supports uranium exports . "I’m also in awe of his hypocrisy on the issue.
Revised:  He said Mr Beazley's opposition was "hypocritical" given that he supports uranium exports . "I’m also in awe of his hypocrisy on the issue.
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Original:  He said that Mr Beazley's opposition was "hypocritical" given that he supports uranium exports . "I’m also in awe of his hypocrisy on the issue.
Revised:  He said that Mr Beazley's opposition was "hypocritical" . "I’m also in awe of his hypocrisy on the issue.
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Original:  State Labor leaders have also spoken out about their opposition to nuclear energy.
Revised:  State Labor leaders have voiced their opposition to nuclear energy.
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Original:  NSW Premier Morris Iemma said that NSW had laws prohibiting the building of a  plant in NSW. In NSW , the mining and enrichment of Uranium and construction of nuclear reactors not owned by the Australian Nuclear Science and Technology Organisation (ANSTO) are illegal .
Revised:  NSW Premier Morris Iemma said that NSW had laws prohibiting the building of a nuclear power plant in NSW. In NSW , the mining and enrichment of Uranium and construction of nuclear reactors not owned by the Australian Nuclear Science and Technology Organisation (ANSTO) are illegal .
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Original:  NSW Premier Morris Iemma said that NSW had laws prohibiting the building of a  plant in NSW. In NSW , the mining and enrichment of Uranium and construction of nuclear reactors not owned by the Australian Nuclear Science and Technology Organisation (ANSTO) are illegal .
Revised:  NSW Premier Morris Iemma said that NSW had laws prohibiting the building of a plant in NSW. Under NSW law , the mining and enrichment of Uranium and construction of nuclear reactors not owned by the Australian Nuclear Science and Technology Organisation (ANSTO) are illegal .
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Original:  NSW Premier Morris Iemma said that NSW had laws prohibiting the building of a  plant in NSW. In NSW , the mining and enrichment of Uranium and construction of nuclear reactors not owned by the Australian Nuclear Science and Technology Organisation (ANSTO) are illegal .
Revised:  NSW Premier Morris Iemma said that NSW had laws prohibiting the building of a plant in NSW. In NSW , the mining and enrichment of Uranium and construction of nuclear reactors not owned by the Australian Nuclear Science and Technology Organisation (ANSTO) .
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Original: New Zealand born Elaine Puku is on life support in Christchurch Hospital's intensive-care unit after receiving internal and external second-degree burns , she was trying to rescue her children.
Revised: New Zealand-born Elaine Puku is on life support in Christchurch Hospital's intensive-care unit after receiving internal and external second-degree burns , she was trying to rescue her children.
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Original: New Zealand born Elaine Puku is on life support in Christchurch Hospital's intensive-care unit after receiving internal and external second-degree burns , she was trying to rescue her children.
Revised: New Zealand born Elaine Puku is on life support in Christchurch Hospital's intensive-care unit after receiving internal and external second-degree burns while trying to rescue her children.
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Original:   Malcolm Puku, 47, and sons Jeremy, 17, Matthew, 13, and Jordan, 10 , are the other members of the family in the fire .
Revised:  Other family members - Malcolm Puku, 47, and sons Jeremy, 17, Matthew, 13, and Jordan, 10 , are the other members of the family in the fire .
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Original:   Malcolm Puku, 47, and sons Jeremy, 17, Matthew, 13, and Jordan, 10 , are the other members of the family in the fire .
Revised:  Malcolm Puku, 47, and sons Jeremy, 17, Matthew, 13, and Jordan, 10 - were also in the fire .
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Original:  Fire safety officer Graham Davies , said that since the accommodation was built before the compulsory fire detectors it is exempt .
Revised:  Fire safety officer Graham Davies said that the accommodation is exempt since it was built before the compulsory fire detectors it is exempt .
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Original:  Fire safety officer Graham Davies , said that since the accommodation was built before the compulsory fire detectors it is exempt .
Revised:  Fire safety officer Graham Davies , said that since the accommodation was built before the fire detectors became compulsory .
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Original: Other family members - Malcolm Puku, 47, and sons Jeremy, 17, Matthew, 13, and Jordan, 10 - were also in the fire, but escaped gervious injury.
Revised: Other family members - Malcolm Puku, 47, and sons Jeremy, 17, Matthew, 13, and Jordan, 10 - were also in the fire, but escaped grievous injury.
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Original: Shahawar Matin Siraj, 23, faces a maximum life sentence after a Brooklyn federal court jury convicted him of conspiring to place and detonate an explosive on the city's mass transit system.
Revised: Shahawar Matin Siraj, faces a maximum life sentence after a Brooklyn federal court jury convicted him of conspiring to place and detonate an explosive on the city's mass transit system.
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Original:  Their case was strengthened by the testimony of a co-conspirator who pleaded guilty in the case and an undercover police officer who said Siraj openly supported Al-Qaeda leader Osama bin Laden      .
Revised:  Their case was strengthened by the testimony of a co-conspirator who pleaded guilty in the case and an undercover police officer who said Siraj openly supported Al-Qaeda leader Osama bin Laden . .
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Original: Shahawar Matin Siraj, faces a maximum life sentence after a Brooklyn federal court jury convicted him of conspiring to place and detonate an explosive on the city's mass transit system.
Revised: Shahawar Matin Siraj, faces a maximum life sentence after a federal court jury convicted him of conspiring to place and detonate an explosive on the city's mass transit system.
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Original:  Their case was strengthened by the testimony of a co-conspirator who pleaded guilty in the case and an undercover police officer who said Siraj openly supported Al-Qaeda leader Osama bin Laden .
Revised:  Their case was strengthened by the testimony of a co-conspirator who pleaded guilty in the case and an undercover police officer who said Siraj openly supported leader .
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Original: "About 20 [Ministers of Parliament] but 40 journalists including photographers," said filmmaker Amir Muhammed about the screening of his controversial documentary at the National Film Institute on Sunday, May 21st.
Revised: "About 20 [Ministers of Parliament] but 40 journalists including photographers," said filmmaker Amir Muhammed about a screening of his controversial documentary at the National Film Institute on Sunday, May 21st.
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Original:  Among the ministers to speak out on the film, the Culture, Arts and Heritage Minister Datuk Seri Dr Rais Yatim has been widely quoted in the press.
Revised:  Among the ministers to comment on the film, the Culture, Arts and Heritage Minister Datuk Seri Dr Rais Yatim has been widely quoted in the press.
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Original:  Among the ministers to speak out on the film, the Culture, Arts and Heritage Minister Datuk Seri Dr Rais Yatim has been widely quoted in the press.
Revised:  Among the ministers to speak out on the film, Culture, Arts and Heritage Minister Datuk Seri Dr Rais Yatim has been widely quoted in the press.
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Original:  With reference to the May 18th screening, Rais is reported as saying the film features  interviews with former members of the Malayan Communist Party .
Revised:  With reference to the May 18th screening, Rais is reported as saying the film features interviews with former members of the Malayan Communist Party ,
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Original:  " They were vague, not conclusive for any quarters," he said.
Revised:  " they were vague, not conclusive for any quarters," he said.
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Original:  NSTP-owned The New Straits Times reported Datuk Seri Dr Rais Yatim  as saying the film "indeed 'glorifies' former communist leader Chin Peng".
Revised:  The national daily New Straits Times reported Datuk Seri Dr Rais Yatim as saying the film "indeed 'glorifies' former communist leader Chin Peng".
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Original:  In the NST article, Rais is reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time , " The Bernama article incorrectly attributes the source of the ban to the Internal Security Ministry, whereas it was widely reported that the Home Ministry was responsible.
Revised:  Rais is also reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time , " The Bernama article incorrectly attributes the source of the ban to the Internal Security Ministry, whereas it was widely reported that the Home Ministry was responsible.
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Original:  In the NST article, Rais is reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time , " The Bernama article incorrectly attributes the source of the ban to the Internal Security Ministry, whereas it was widely reported that the Home Ministry was responsible.
Revised:  In the NST article, Rais is reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time . " The Bernama article incorrectly attributes the source of the ban to the Internal Security Ministry, whereas it was widely reported that the Home Ministry was responsible.
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Original:  In the NST article, Rais is reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time , " The Bernama article incorrectly attributes the source of the ban to the Internal Security Ministry, whereas it was widely reported that the Home Ministry was responsible.
Revised:  In the NST article, Rais is reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time , " The Bernama article incorrectly attributes the source of the ban to the Internal Security Ministry, it was widely reported that the Home Ministry was responsible.
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Original:  Filmmaker Amir Muhammed has said that the book was used as source material for the movie.
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Original: The national daily New Straits Times also reported on the screening , also focusing on the comments of the Culture, Arts and Heritage Minister .
Revised: The national daily New Straits Times also reported on the screening .
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Original:  New Straits Times followed up with an article where Rais is reported as saying the film "indeed 'glorifies' former communist leader Chin Peng" .
Revised:  The daily followed up with an article where Rais is reported as saying the film "indeed 'glorifies' former communist leader Chin Peng" .
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Original:  Rais is also reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time . "  The film has picked up controversy because it is linked to the Malayan Emergency.
Revised:  "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time . " The film has picked up controversy because it is linked to the Malayan Emergency.
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Original:  Rais is also reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time . "  The film has picked up controversy because it is linked to the Malayan Emergency.
Revised:  Rais is also reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time , " The film has picked up controversy because it is linked to the Malayan Emergency.
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Original:  Rais is also reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time . "  The film has picked up controversy because it is linked to the Malayan Emergency.
Revised:  Rais is also reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time . " said Rais. The film has picked up controversy because it is linked to the Malayan Emergency.
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Original:  Rais is also reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time . "  The film has picked up controversy because it is linked to the Malayan Emergency.
Revised:  Rais is also reported as saying, "Amir should have interviewed the security forces, the Home Guard, the families of the home guard who were killed by the communists, and government officials of the time . " The film has picked up controversy because it is inspired by the Malayan Emergency.
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Original:  Both sides however declared they would abide by the cease-fire agreement made in 2003. 125px|The Siachen Glacier Medal, awarded to Indian Armed Forces personnel who serve in combat situations on the glacier.
Revised:  Both sides however declared they would abide by the cease-fire agreement made in 2003. 
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Original:  He is saying, 'You can't bully people and we have a right to object and you can't throw people out of school for voicing their opinions.   
Revised:  He is saying, 'You can't bully people and we have a right to object and you can't throw people out of school for voicing their opinions. '" 
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Original:  He is saying, 'You can't bully people and we have a right to object and you can't throw people out of school for voicing their opinions.   
Revised:  He is saying, 'You can't bully people and we have a right to object and you can't throw people out of school for voicing their opinions. Source 
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Original: On May     2nd, the student posted: " I feel threatened by you , I cant even have a public Web page with out you bullying me and telling me what has to be removed.
Revised: On May 2nd, the student posted: " I feel threatened by you , I cant even have a public web page with out you bullying me and telling me what has to be removed.
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Original:  Where is this freedom of speech that this government is sworn to uphold? ... Did you ever stop to think this will start a community backlash?
Revised:  where is this freedom of speech that this government is sworn to uphold? ... Did you ever stop to think this will start a community backlash?
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Original:  The kids at Columbine did what the did because they were bullied. ...
Revised:  The kids at Columbine did what they did because they were bullied. ...
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Original:  The kids at Columbine did what the did because they were bullied. ...
Revised:  The kids at Columbine did what the did because they were bullied. 
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Original:  We voiced our opinions.
Revised:  we voiced our opinions.
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Original:  You are the real threat here. you are depriving us of our right to learn. now stick that in your pipe and smoke it.
Revised:  you are the real threat here. you are depriving us of our right to learn. now stick that in your pipe and smoke it.
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Original:  " Says attorney Carl Buck, who feels the school authories have overstepped their boundaries: "The district is going to take away the student's education for exercising his freedom of speech...
Revised:  Says attorney Carl Buck, who feels the school authories have overstepped their boundaries: "The district is going to take away the student's education for exercising his freedom of speech...
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Original: dear plainfield south or district 202, now that my brother isnt in school for the time being you must guess that everything is going to stop...your wrong...we dont stand down...as americans we have the right to speek our mind...as a matter of fact i think that im going to speek mine now on what i think about south...south is a school were they think that they have control over the world...wrong!
Revised:  now that my brother isnt in school for the time being you must guess that everything is going to stop...your wrong...we dont stand down...as americans we have the right to speek our mind...as a matter of fact i think that im going to speek mine now on what i think about south...south is a school were they think that they have control over the world...wrong!
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Original:  you just dont want your school to be in the news about everthing that is wrong with  it... for example..
Revised:  you just dont want your school to be in the news about everthing that is wrong with it... 
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Original:  . your dress code is violated everyday and yet you put the people who dont show skin all the time in CONTROL CENTER..
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Original:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few ..  . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action ..  . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. .  . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people ..  . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
Revised:  . its fucking bullshit. .. . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action .. . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. . . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people .. . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
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Original:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few ..  . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action ..  . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. .  . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people ..  . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
Revised:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few .. .1st of all. . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action .. . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. . . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people .. . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
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Original:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few ..  . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action ..  . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. .  . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people ..  . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
Revised:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few .. . .. . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. . . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people .. . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
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Original:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few ..  . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action ..  . dont take action on thoughs who do it once. .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. .  . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people ..  . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
Revised:  . hmm sounds like your only punishing a few .. . if someone isnt fallowing the schoolcode then take action .. . .. i see girls with skirts up to their butts and they will walk right by a dean, asistant principle, or hall monitior without complaint. . . fix what you made wrong...all you want to do is pin point people .. . go ahead and suspened thoughs that speek out. .. we will always know that we are right and you arent..
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