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Original:  The seniors won this contest, allowing them to have a no-uniform day  Dec. 11.
Revised:  The seniors won this contest, allowing them to have a no-uniform day on Dec. 11.
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Original: 250px|  MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle  United States defense officials have acknowledged that insurgents in Iraq had been able to intercept live video feeds from the U.S. MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle using widely available software.
Revised: 250px| MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle . United States defense officials have acknowledged that insurgents in Iraq had been able to intercept live video feeds from the U.S. MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle using widely available software.
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Original: 250px|  MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle  United States defense officials have acknowledged that insurgents in Iraq had been able to intercept live video feeds from the U.S. MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle using widely available software.
Revised: 250px| MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle United States defense officials acknowledged that Iraqi insurgents are intercepting live video feeds from the U.S. MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle using widely available software.
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Original: 250px|  MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle  United States defense officials have acknowledged that insurgents in Iraq had been able to intercept live video feeds from the U.S. MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle using widely available software.
Revised: 250px| MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle United States defense officials have acknowledged that insurgents in Iraq had been able to intercept live video feeds from U.S. MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle using widely available software.
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Original: 250px|  MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle  United States defense officials have acknowledged that insurgents in Iraq had been able to intercept live video feeds from the U.S. MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle using widely available software.
Revised: 250px| MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicle United States defense officials have acknowledged that insurgents in Iraq had been able to intercept live video feeds from the U.S. MQ-1 Predator unmanned aerial vehicles using widely available software.
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Original:  A U.S. defense official, who spoke on condition of anonymity, reacted to the report saying it was an old problem that has been fixed.
Revised:  A U.S. defense official, anonymously, informing them it is an old problem that has been fixed.
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Original:  A U.S. defense official, who spoke on condition of anonymity, reacted to the report saying it was an old problem that has been fixed.
Revised:  A U.S. defense official, who spoke on condition of anonymity, reacted to the report saying it was an old problem , which has already been fixed.
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Original:  The story broke on Thurday in the Wall Street Journal with a defense official, anonymously, informing them it is an old problem, which has already been fixed.
Revised:  The story broke on Thursday in the Wall Street Journal with a defense official, anonymously, informing them it is an old problem, which has already been fixed.
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Original:  Germany is to call a meeting on the issue in the coming months and a climate change summit is also expected to be held in Mexico within the coming year  
Revised:  Germany is to call a meeting on the issue in the coming months and a climate change summit is also expected to be held in Mexico within the coming year . 
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Original:  President of the United States Barack Obama has announced that wealthy and developing nations have reached what he called a "meaningful agreement" at the UN Climate Change Conference.
Revised:  President of the United States Barack Obama announced that wealthy and developing nations have reached what he called a "meaningful agreement" at the UN Climate Change Conference.
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Original:  President of the United States Barack Obama has announced that wealthy and developing nations have reached what he called a "meaningful agreement" at the UN Climate Change Conference.
Revised:  President of the United States Barack Obama has announced that wealthy and developing nations reached what he called a "meaningful agreement" at the UN Climate Change Conference.
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Original:  President of the United States Barack Obama  announced that wealthy and developing nations  reached what he called a "meaningful agreement" at the UN Climate Change Conference.
Revised:  President of the United States Barack Obama has announced that wealthy and developing nations reached what he called a "meaningful agreement" at the UN Climate Change Conference.
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Original:  President of the United States Barack Obama  announced that wealthy and developing nations  reached what he called a "meaningful agreement" at the UN Climate Change Conference.
Revised:  President of the United States Barack Obama announced that wealthy and developing nations have reached what he called a "meaningful agreement" at the UN Climate Change Conference.
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Original:  She would make her final film appearance in the 1974 film The Towering Infern
Revised:  She would make her final on-camera appearance in the 1974 film The Towering Infern
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Original:  She would make her final film appearance in the 1974 film The Towering Infern
Revised:  She would make her final film appearance in the 1974 disaster movie The Towering Infern
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Original:  She would make her final on-camera appearance in the 1974 disaster movie The Towering Infern 
Revised:  She would make her final on-camera appearance in the 1974 disaster movie The Towering Inferno. 
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Original:  Her third marriage was in 1971 to industrialist Norton Simon, six years after the death of her second husband David O. Selznick.
Revised:  She married for a third and final time in 1971 to industrialist Norton Simon, six years after the death of her second husband David O. Selznick.
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Original:  Jones was an active force behind the operations of the museum, serving as chairman from Simon's death in 1993 to 2003, and chairman emeritus until her own deat
Revised:  Jones was an active force behind the operations of the museum, serving as chairman from Simon's death in 1993 to 2003, and as trustee emeritus until her own deat
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Original:  Jones was an active force behind the operations of the museum, serving as chairman from Simon's death in 1993 to 2003, and chairman emeritus until her own deat
Revised:  Jones was an active force behind the operations of the museum, serving as chairman from Simon's death in 1993 to 2003, and chairman emeritus until her own death
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Original: Born Phyllis Lee Isley in Tulsa, Oklahoma on March 2, 1919, her pursuit of dramatic acting took her to New York City at the age of 19, leaving for Hollywood one year later.
Revised: Born Phyllis Lee Isley in Tulsa, Oklahoma on March 2, 1919, her pursuit of fame as an actress took her to New York City at the age of 19, leaving for Hollywood one year later.
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Original:  Guraded by five hundered policemen, the parade promoting tolerance towards non-heterosexual people went without any major incidents.
Revised:  Guarded by five hundered policemen, the parade promoting tolerance towards non-heterosexual people went without any major incidents.
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Original:  Helena Štimac Radin, the president of Government's institution for sexual equality, was present at the parade.
Revised:  Helena Štimac Radin, president of the Government's institution for sexual equality, was present at the parade.
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Original:  Organizers of the parade, a feminist organization Epikriza, said that postponing the event caused low turnout this year.
Revised:  Organizers of the parade, the feminist organization Epikriza, said that postponing the event caused low turnout this year.
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Original:  It was not clear for about three weeks if the parade will take place at all, as the initial organization Iskorak, which was supposed to organize the parade this year, decided not to take place in it as they think that another type of manifestation would be more appropriate.
Revised:  It was not clear for about three weeks if the parade would take place at all, as the initial organization Iskorak, which was supposed to organize the parade this year, decided not to take place in it as they think that another type of manifestation would be more appropriate.
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Original:  It was not clear for about three weeks if the parade will take place at all, as the initial organization Iskorak, which was supposed to organize the parade this year, decided not to take place in it as they think that another type of manifestation would be more appropriate.
Revised:  It was not clear for about three weeks if the parade will take place at all, as the initial organization Iskorak, which was supposed to organize the parade this year, decided not to initiate it as they think that another type of manifestation would be more appropriate.
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Original:  It was not clear for about three weeks if the parade will take place at all, as the initial organization Iskorak, which was supposed to organize the parade this year, decided not to take place in it as they think that another type of manifestation would be more appropriate.
Revised:  It was not clear for about three weeks if the parade will take place at all, as the initial organization Iskorak, which was supposed to organize the parade this year, decided not to take place in it as they felt another type of manifestation would be more appropriate.
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Original:  It was not clear for about three weeks if the parade will take place at all, as the initial organization Iskorak, which was supposed to organize the parade this year, decided not to take place in it as they think that another type of manifestation would be more appropriate.
Revised:  It was not clear for about three weeks if the parade will take place at all, as the initial organization Iskorak, which was supposed to organize the parade this year, decided not to take place in it as they think that another type of event would be more appropriate.
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Original:  Participants held such banners as "Love always wins", "Homophobia is illness" and "Sexual education into schools".
Revised:  Participants held banners saying "Love always wins", "Homophobia is illness" and "Sexual education into schools".
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Original:  It drives me crazy", one of the protestors said according to  Novi List.
Revised:  It drives me crazy", one of the protestors said according to the newspaper Novi List.
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Original:  Police preventevly checked legimitation of several young bold men, but there were no bigger incidents
Revised:  Police preventevly checked legimitation of several young bold men, but there were no larger incidents
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Original:  Guarded by five hundered policemen, the parade promoting tolerance towards non-heterosexual people went without any major incidents.
Revised:  Guarded by five hundred policemen, the parade promoting tolerance towards non-heterosexual people went without any major incidents.
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Original:  "I am angry because my tax money is spent on this kind of things .
Revised:  "I am angry because my tax money is spent on this kind of thing .
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Original: The court heard how 46-year-old electrical engineer Paul Harvey was arguing with 48-year-old American wife Gloria Laguna on topics relating to the education of the man's step-daughter's education and his former wife.
Revised: The court heard how 46-year-old electrical engineer Paul Harvey was arguing with 48-year-old American wife Gloria Laguna on topics relating to the man's step-daughter's education and his former wife.
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Original: In South of England the wintry weather has also affected cross channel services, with Operation Stack in effect due to the closure of the Port of Calais.
Revised: In South of England the wintry weather has also affected cross channel services, with Operation Stack in effect due to issues at the Port of Calais.
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Original: In South of England the wintry weather has also affected cross channel services, with Operation Stack in effect due to issues at the Port of Calais.
Revised: In South of England the wintry weather has also affected cross channel services, with Operation Stack being brought into effect due to issues at the Port of Calais.
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Original:  Because of the problems with the Channel Tunnel and the Port of Calais, it will take a considerable time to clear the backlog... 
Revised:  Because of the problems with the Channel Tunnel and the Port of Calais, it will take a considerable time to clear the backlog... "
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Original: A second day of winter weather and snow has caused further disruption in the UK  At 15:13 GMT  one Wikinews contributor in West Lothian described the conditions there as 'white-out'  although later conditions were reported to have improved.
Revised: A second day of winter weather and snow has caused further disruption in the UK . At 15:13 GMT one Wikinews contributor in West Lothian described the conditions there as 'white-out' although later conditions were reported to have improved.
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Original: A second day of winter weather and snow has caused further disruption in the UK  At 15:13 GMT  one Wikinews contributor in West Lothian described the conditions there as 'white-out'  although later conditions were reported to have improved.
Revised: A second day of winter weather and snow has caused further disruption in the UK At 15:13 GMT , one Wikinews contributor in West Lothian described the conditions there as 'white-out' although later conditions were reported to have improved.
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Original: A second day of winter weather and snow has caused further disruption in the UK  At 15:13 GMT  one Wikinews contributor in West Lothian described the conditions there as 'white-out'  although later conditions were reported to have improved.
Revised: A second day of winter weather and snow has caused further disruption in the UK At 15:13 GMT one Wikinews contributor in West Lothian described the conditions there as 'white-out' , although later conditions were reported to have improved.
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Original:  Forecasters have indicated further snow in Scotland later this evening, with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15cm into Sunday.
Revised:  Forecasters have indicated further snow in Scotland later this evening, with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15 centimetres into Sunday.
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Original:  Traffic around both Dover and Folkstone was reported as heavy, with Chief Superintendent Matthew Nix(Kent police) making an appeal for "  . . everyone to consider whether their journey is really necessary.
Revised:  Traffic around both Dover and Folkstone was reported as heavy, with Chief Superintendent Matthew Nix(Kent police) making an appeal for " .. . . everyone to consider whether their journey is really necessary.
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Original:  Traffic around both Dover and Folkstone was reported as heavy, with Chief Superintendent Matthew Nix(Kent police) making an appeal for "  . . everyone to consider whether their journey is really necessary.
Revised:  Traffic around both Dover and Folkstone was reported as heavy, with Chief Superintendent Matthew Nix(Kent police) making an appeal for " . everyone to consider whether their journey is really necessary.
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Original:  A National Hunt meeting at Carlisle tommorrow(20th) has also been abandoned
Revised:  A National Hunt meeting at Carlisle yesterday was also abandoned
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Original:  Forecasters have indicated further snow in Scotland later this evening , with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15 centimetres into Sunday  .
Revised:  Forecasters had indicated further snow in Scotland later this evening , with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15 centimetres into Sunday .
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Original:  Heavy snow for parts of Northern England is also forecast.
Revised:  Heavy snow for parts of Northern England had also been forecast.
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Original:  Forecasters had indicated further snow in Scotland later in the evening(19th) , with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15 centimetres into Sunday (20th) .
Revised:  Forecasters had indicated further snow in Scotland later in the evening(19th) , with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15 centimetres into Sunday .
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Original:  At least 20 football fixtures across the UK have been postponed, with some rugby matches also affected.
Revised:  At least twenty football fixtures across the UK have been postponed, with some rugby matches also affected.
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Original: Yesterday NASA revealed that a flyby of its probe Cassini past Titan, a moon of Saturn, has produced a historic image: the first photograph showing liquid on a world other than our own.
Revised: NASA have revealed that a flyby of its probe Cassini past Titan, a moon of Saturn, has produced a historic image: the first photograph showing liquid on a world other than our own.
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Original:  The lake seen in the photograph is called Kraken Mare and at 150,000 square miles (400,000 square kilometers) it isn't the largest basin on north Titan, but it is bigger than the Earth's biggest lake, the Caspian Sea  
Revised:  The lake seen in the photograph is called Kraken Mare and at 150,000 square miles (400,000 square kilometers) it isn't the largest basin on north Titan, but it is bigger than the Earth's biggest lake, the Caspian Sea . 
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Original:  How does the liquid methane run across the surface?  
Revised:  How does the liquid methane run across the surface? " 
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Original:  The northern hemisphere has only been visible since August 2009, as before then it was covered by Winter weather.
Revised:  The northern hemisphere has only been visible since August 2009, as before then it was covered by winter weather.
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Original:  Titan's atmosphere is, like Earth's, mainly nitrogen  but temperatures on the icy world are around -180°C.
Revised:  Titan's atmosphere is, like Earth's, mainly nitrogen , but temperatures on the icy world are around -180°C.
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Original:  The lake seen in the photograph is called Kraken Mare  and at 150,000 square miles (400,000 square kilometers)  it isn't the largest basin on north Titan, but it is bigger than the Earth's biggest lake, the Caspian Sea.
Revised:  The lake seen in the photograph is called Kraken Mare , and at 150,000 square miles (400,000 square kilometers) it isn't the largest basin on north Titan, but it is bigger than the Earth's biggest lake, the Caspian Sea.
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Original:  The lake seen in the photograph is called Kraken Mare  and at 150,000 square miles (400,000 square kilometers)  it isn't the largest basin on north Titan, but it is bigger than the Earth's biggest lake, the Caspian Sea.
Revised:  The lake seen in the photograph is called Kraken Mare and at 150,000 square miles (400,000 square kilometers) , it isn't the largest basin on north Titan, but it is bigger than the Earth's biggest lake, the Caspian Sea.
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Original: Two weeks ago, the government of Brazil threatened to break the patent on the most widel-prescribed AIDS medication, Keletra (produced by Abbott Labs), if the makers would not comply with the government's requests.
Revised: Two weeks ago, the government of Brazil threatened to break the patent on the most widely-prescribed AIDS medication, Keletra (produced by Abbott Labs), if the makers would not comply with the government's requests.
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Original:  Brazilian citizens recieve free AIDS medication, paid for by the government.
Revised:  Brazilian citizens receive free AIDS medication, paid for by the government.
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Original:  This bulk purchasing arrangement allows Brazilian citizens to recieve the most affordable healthcare in the developed world
Revised:  This bulk purchasing arrangement allows Brazilian citizens to receive the most affordable healthcare in the developed world
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Original: Erasing a two-set deficit, the Penn State Nittany Lions came from behind in dramatic fashion to win the 2009 NCAA Division 1 volleyball championship over the  Texas Longhorns, held Dec. 19 in St.
Revised: Erasing a two-set deficit, the Penn State Nittany Lions came from behind in dramatic fashion to win the 2009 NCAA Division 1 volleyball championship over the University of Texas Longhorns, held Dec. 19 in St.
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Original:  Down 2-0, Penn State won the next three sets to extend their winning streak to 102 matches and in the process , earning their third consecutive volleyball title   .
Revised:  Down 2-0, Penn State won the next three sets to extend their winning streak to 102 matches and in the process earning their third consecutive volleyball title .
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Original:  Down 2-0, Penn State won the next three sets to extend their winning streak to 102 matches and in the process , earning their third consecutive volleyball title   .
Revised:  Down 2-0, Penn State won the next three sets to extend their winning streak to 102 matches and in the process , earning their third consecutive volleyball title . .
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Original:  Some Brazilians have protested against the violence of MST tactics . MST says they are just defending themselves because the farms are hiring gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions of the MST . A number of farmers fear losing their properties to the movement
Revised:  Some Brazilians have protested against the violence of MST . MST says they are just defending themselves because the farms are hiring gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions of the MST . A number of farmers fear losing their properties to the movement
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Original:  Some Brazilians have protested against the violence of MST tactics . MST says they are just defending themselves because the farms are hiring gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions of the MST . A number of farmers fear losing their properties to the movement
Revised:  Some Brazilians have protested against the violence of MST tactics . MST says they defend themselves because many farms hires gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions of the MST . A number of farmers fear losing their properties to the movement
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Original:  Some Brazilians have protested against the violence of MST tactics . MST says they are just defending themselves because the farms are hiring gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions of the MST . A number of farmers fear losing their properties to the movement
Revised:  Some Brazilians have protested against the violence of MST tactics . MST says they are just defending themselves because the farms are hiring gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions . A number of farmers fear losing their properties to the movement
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Original: Saturday December 04, 2004, Rondonia, Brazil - Members of the Brazilian Landless Workers Movement (MST) have been accused of beating to death Paulo Brizola Nunes.
Revised: Saturday December 04, 2004, Rondonia, Brazil - Members of the Brazilian Landless Workers Movement (MST) have beating to death Paulo Brizola Nunes.
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Original: Saturday December 04, 2004, Rondonia, Brazil - According to Agência Estado, Brazilian newspaper, members of the Brazilian Landless Workers Movement (MST) have  beating to death Paulo Brizola Nunes.
Revised: Saturday December 04, 2004, Rondonia, Brazil - According to Agência Estado, members of the Brazilian Landless Workers Movement (MST) have beating to death Paulo Brizola Nunes.
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