wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: SHOA, or Servicio Hidrográfico y Oceanográfico de la Armada de Chile (  Spanish for Hydrographic and Oceanographic Service of the Chilean Navy) , has been criticized for their response to a tsunami that hit the coast of Chile on February 27.
Revised:  Servicio Hidrográfico y Oceanográfico de la Armada de Chile ( Spanish for Hydrographic and Oceanographic Service of the Chilean Navy) , has been criticized for their response to a tsunami that hit the coast of Chile on February 27.
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Original: SHOA, or Servicio Hidrográfico y Oceanográfico de la Armada de Chile (  Spanish for Hydrographic and Oceanographic Service of the Chilean Navy) , has been criticized for their response to a tsunami that hit the coast of Chile on February 27.
Revised: SHOA, or Servicio Hidrográfico y Oceanográfico de la Armada de Chile ( SHOA, Spanish for Hydrographic and Oceanographic Service of the Chilean Navy) , has been criticized for their response to a tsunami that hit the coast of Chile on February 27.
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Original:  Last Tuesday, the service published a complete report about its actions, recognizing the difficulty of arriving at every member of their Maritime and Naval networks.
Revised:  The agency recognized the difficulty of arriving at every member of their Maritime and Naval networks.
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Original:  Last Tuesday, the service published a complete report about its actions, recognizing the difficulty of arriving at every member of their Maritime and Naval networks.
Revised:  Last Tuesday, the service published a complete report about its actions, recognizing the difficulty of arriving at every member of its Maritime and Naval networks.
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Original:  They reported that the tsunami warning was activated at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, whose identity "was not possible to determine";
Revised:  It reported that the tsunami warning was activated at 03:51 local time (06:51 UTC), 17 minutes after the earthquake, due to the delay of an ONEMI operator, whose identity "was not possible to determine";
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Original:  Even though the tsunami warning was activated 17 minutes after the earthquake , the Army said that it was an "adequate time for emergencies of this nature, considering the time required to obtain the information on the epicentre and magnitude."
Revised:  Despite the late tsunami warning , the Army said that it was an "adequate time for emergencies of this nature, considering the time required to obtain the information on the epicentre and magnitude."
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Original:  Phil Radford, who is with the Greenpeace group, said that " e xpanding offshore drilling in areas that have been protected for decades threatens our oceans and the coastal communities that depend on them with devastating oil spills, more pollution and climate change."
Revised:  Phil Radford, who is with the Greenpeace group, said that " xpanding offshore drilling in areas that have been protected for decades threatens our oceans and the coastal communities that depend on them with devastating oil spills, more pollution and climate change."
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Original:  Phil Radford, who is with the Greenpeace group, said that " e xpanding offshore drilling in areas that have been protected for decades threatens our oceans and the coastal communities that depend on them with devastating oil spills, more pollution and climate change."
Revised:  Phil Radford, who is with the Greenpeace group, said that " e expanding offshore drilling in areas that have been protected for decades threatens our oceans and the coastal communities that depend on them with devastating oil spills, more pollution and climate change."
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Original:  Greenpeace also said that lifting the ban fuelled the US' "addiction to oil" . "Expanding offshore drilling in areas that have been protected for decades threatens our oceans and the coastal communities that depend on them with devastating oil spills, more pollution and climate change," he said .
Revised:  Greenpeace also said that lifting the ban fuelled the US' "addiction to oil" .
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Original:  Phil Radford, who is with the Greenpeace group, said that " expanding  offshore drilling in areas that have been protected for decades threatens our oceans and the coastal communities that depend on them with devastating oil spills, more pollution and climate change."
Revised:  Phil Radford, who is with the Greenpeace group, said that " e offshore drilling in areas that have been protected for decades threatens our oceans and the coastal communities that depend on them with devastating oil spills, more pollution and climate change."
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Original:  "Expanding offshore drilling in areas that have been protected for decades threatens our oceans and the coastal communities that depend on them with devastating oil spills, more pollution and climate change," he said.
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Original: Second leg favorites  RSC Anderlacht secured an almost certain victory in the second round, as they won 5 - 0 at home against PFC Neftchi.
Revised: Selected match reports RSC Anderlacht secured an almost certain victory in the second round, as they won 5 - 0 at home against PFC Neftchi.
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Original:  Fotball - FC Haka 1 - 0 FBK Kaunas - Liverpool F.C. 1 - 3 F91 Dudelange - SK Rapid Wien 1 - 6 FK Partizan - Sheriff 1 - 0 Shelbourne F.C. - FC Steaua Bucureşti  Malmö FF - Maccabi Haifa F.C. 3 - 2 FC Artmedia Bratislava - Celtic F.C. 5 - 0 FK Rabotnicki - FC Lokomotiv Moskva 1 - 1 SK Tirana - PFC CSKA Sofia  Debreceni VSC - HNK Hajduk Spli
Revised:  Fotball - FC Haka 1 - 0 FBK Kaunas - Liverpool F.C. 1 - 3 F91 Dudelange - SK Rapid Wien 1 - 6 FK Partizan - Sheriff 1 - 0 Shelbourne F.C. - FC Steaua Bucureşti 0 - 0 Malmö FF - Maccabi Haifa F.C. 3 - 2 FC Artmedia Bratislava - Celtic F.C. 5 - 0 FK Rabotnicki - FC Lokomotiv Moskva 1 - 1 SK Tirana - PFC CSKA Sofia Debreceni VSC - HNK Hajduk Spli
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Original:  Fotball - FC Haka 1 - 0 FBK Kaunas - Liverpool F.C. 1 - 3 F91 Dudelange - SK Rapid Wien 1 - 6 FK Partizan - Sheriff 1 - 0 Shelbourne F.C. - FC Steaua Bucureşti  Malmö FF - Maccabi Haifa F.C. 3 - 2 FC Artmedia Bratislava - Celtic F.C. 5 - 0 FK Rabotnicki - FC Lokomotiv Moskva 1 - 1 SK Tirana - PFC CSKA Sofia  Debreceni VSC - HNK Hajduk Spli
Revised:  Fotball - FC Haka 1 - 0 FBK Kaunas - Liverpool F.C. 1 - 3 F91 Dudelange - SK Rapid Wien 1 - 6 FK Partizan - Sheriff 1 - 0 Shelbourne F.C. - FC Steaua Bucureşti Malmö FF - Maccabi Haifa F.C. 3 - 2 FC Artmedia Bratislava - Celtic F.C. 5 - 0 FK Rabotnicki - FC Lokomotiv Moskva 1 - 1 SK Tirana - PFC CSKA Sofia 0 - 2 Debreceni VSC - HNK Hajduk Spli
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Original:  Fotball - FC Haka 1 - 0 FBK Kaunas - Liverpool F.C. 1 - 3 F91 Dudelange - SK Rapid Wien 1 - 6 FK Partizan - Sheriff 1 - 0 Shelbourne F.C. - FC Steaua Bucureşti 0 - 0 Malmö FF - Maccabi Haifa F.C. 3 - 2 FC Artmedia Bratislava - Celtic F.C. 5 - 0 FK Rabotnicki - FC Lokomotiv Moskva 1 - 1 SK Tirana - PFC CSKA Sofia 0 - 2 Debreceni VSC - HNK Hajduk Spli
Revised:  Fotball - FC Haka 1 - 0 FBK Kaunas - Liverpool F.C. 1 - 3 F91 Dudelange - SK Rapid Wien 1 - 6 FK Partizan - Sheriff 1 - 0 Shelbourne F.C. - FC Steaua Bucureşti 0 - 0 Malmö FF - Maccabi Haifa F.C. 3 - 2 FC Artmedia Bratislava - Celtic F.C. 5 - 0 FK Rabotnicki - FC Lokomotiv Moskva 1 - 1 SK Tirana - PFC CSKA Sofia 0 - 2 Debreceni VSC - HNK Hajduk Split 3 -
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Original:  Canada has yet to ratify the UN biosafety protocol and opposes compulsory GM labeling and liability  
Revised:  Canada has yet to ratify the UN biosafety protocol and opposes compulsory GM labeling and liability . 
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Original:   Dr. Tewolde has formerly clashed with his Canadian counterparts, demanding higher standards to prevent GM contamination .
Revised:  In the past, Dr. Tewolde has formerly clashed with his Canadian counterparts, demanding higher standards to prevent GM contamination .
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Original:   Dr. Tewolde has formerly clashed with his Canadian counterparts, demanding higher standards to prevent GM contamination .
Revised:  Dr. Tewolde has disagreed with Canadian scientists on proposed methords to regulate GM (Genetically Modified) products .
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Original: The 17th May 2005, Dr. Tewolde Berhan Gebre Egziabher, the Ethiopian government's chief scientist and its representative to the Montreal-based UN Convention on Biological Diversity (CBD) had his passport returned without the requested Canadian visa, and without explanation.
Revised:  Dr. Tewolde Berhan Gebre Egziabher, the Ethiopian government's chief scientist and its representative to the Montreal-based UN Convention on Biological Diversity (CBD) had his passport returned without the requested Canadian visa, and without explanation.
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Original:  In the past, Dr. Tewolde has disagreed with Canadian scientists on proposed methords to regulate GM (Genetically Modified) products  
Revised:  In the past, Dr. Tewolde has disagreed with Canadian scientists on proposed methords to regulate GM (Genetically Modified) products . 
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Original:  Dr. Tewolde is Africa's chief negotiator for the Cartagena (biosafety) Protocol .
Revised:  Dr. Tewolde is Africa's chief negotiator for the Cartagena Protocol on Biosafety .
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Original:  Tewolde had announced he would be visiting Montreal the first week of August to lobby for the labeling of geneticaly modified  seeds and food products and urge companies and governments to accept liability for GM contamination their seeds could lead to.
Revised:  Tewolde had announced he would be visiting Montreal the first week of August to lobby for the labeling of geneticaly modified (GM) seeds and food products and urge companies and governments to accept liability for GM contamination their seeds could lead to.
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Original:  Canada has yet to ratify the UN biosafety protocol and opposes compulsory GM labeling and liability.
Revised:  Canada has yet to ratify the UN biosafety protocol and opposes compulsory genetically modified labeling and liability.
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Original:  In the past, Dr. Tewolde has disagreed with Canadian scientists on proposed methords to regulate GM (Genetically Modified) products   .
Revised:  In the past, Dr. Tewolde has disagreed with Canadian scientists on proposed methords to regulate GM products. .
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Original: This closely mirrors another incident just days earlier where 12 Ugandans (mainly youths) were denied visas by the Canadian High Commission in Kenya.
Revised: This closely mirrors another more recent incident where 12 Ugandans (mainly youths) were denied visas by the Canadian High Commission in Kenya.
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Original: US FAA Seal A helicopter and a small airplane collided near in  just after 3:40 Thursday afternoon.
Revised: US FAA Seal A helicopter and a small airplane collided near in , just after 3:40 Thursday afternoon.
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Original:  The collision was reported a mile form the airport, just north of Interstate 70.
Revised:  The collision was reported a mile from the airport, just north of Interstate 70.
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Original:  The collision was reported a mile form the airport, just north of Interstate 70.
Revised:  The collision was reported a mile form the airport, just north of .
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Original:  The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA} said that the helicopter, a , was on a training mission when it collided with a .
Revised:  The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA} said the helicopter, a , was on a training mission when it collided with a .
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Original: The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA} said the helicopter , a , was on a training mission when it collided with a .
Revised: The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA} said the helicopter was on a training mission when it collided with a .
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Original:  The National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) is leading the investigation
Revised:  The National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) is in charge of the investigation
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Original: The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA  said the helicopter was on a training mission when it collided with a .
Revised: The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA ) said the helicopter was on a training mission when it collided with a .
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Original:  The collision was reported a (about one and a half ) from the airport, just north of .
Revised:  The collision was reported around a ( one and a half ) from the airport, just north of .
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Original:  The plane is still mostly in one piece while the helicopter is completely totaled .
Revised:  The plane was still mostly in one piece while the helicopter is completely totaled .
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Original: US FAA Seal A helicopter and a small airplane collided near in , just after 3:40 yesterday afternoon (1940 ).
Revised:  A helicopter and a small airplane collided near in , just after 3:40 yesterday afternoon (1940 ).
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Original:   The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) said the helicopter was on a training mission when it collided with a .
Revised:  US FAA Seal The Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) said the helicopter was on a training mission when it collided with a .
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Original:  The court found that he, along with his son Franck V. and Franck's former spouse, Patricia M., was one the instigators of a sex ring that abused 45 children, mostly in the flat of the couple  
Revised:  The court found that he, along with his son Franck V. and Franck's former spouse, Patricia M., was one the instigators of a sex ring that abused 45 children, mostly in the flat of the couple . 
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Original:  The court found that he, along with his son Franck V. and Franck's former spouse, Patricia M., was one the instigators of a sex ring that abused 45 children, mostly in the flat of the couple .
Revised:  The court found that he, along with his son Franck V. and Franck's former spouse, Patricia M., was one the instigators of a sex ring that abused 45 children, mostly in the couple's flat .
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Original:  About 20 of them admitted  the charges, while other claimed to have never heard of a sex ring
Revised:  About 20 of them admitted to the charges, while other claimed to have never heard of a sex ring
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Original: The absuses of children aged between six months and 12 years took place in a poor and deprived area of the western french town of Angers.
Revised: The abuses of children aged between six months and 12 years took place in a poor and deprived area of the western french town of Angers.
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Original: The court in Angers handed down sentences ranging from four months suspended to 28 years for, among others, Philppe V., the key accuced .
Revised: The court in Angers handed down sentences ranging from four months suspended to 28 years for, among others, Philppe V., the key accused .
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Original:  About 20 of them admitted to the charges, while other claimed to have never heard of a sex ring
Revised:  About 20 of them admitted to the charges, while others claimed to have never heard of a sex ring
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Original:  Last week, workers voted 84 per cent against the latest contract offer from the LCBO, which called for raises of 11 per cent over four years to full-time staff . C
Revised:  Last week, workers voted 84 per cent against the latest contract offer from the LCBO, which called for raises of 11 per cent over four years to full-time staff 
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Original:  During their testimony yesterdayin Fort Meade , they said the interrogation techniques they used  were learned from a team of interrogators dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
Revised:  During the defendants testimony yesterday , they said the interrogation techniques they used were learned from a team of interrogators dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
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Original:  The investigating officer of the military court, Maj. Glenn Simpkins, has two weeks to weigh the evidence  . Some or all charges could be dropped, but if charges remain, a recommendation will be made on how they should be dealt with.
Revised:  The investigating officer of the military court, Maj. Glenn Simpkins, has two weeks to weigh the evidence presented . Some or all charges could be dropped, but if charges remain, a recommendation will be made on how they should be dealt with.
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Original:  The investigating officer of the military court, Maj. Glenn Simpkins, has two weeks to weigh the evidence  . Some or all charges could be dropped, but if charges remain, a recommendation will be made on how they should be dealt with.
Revised:  The investigating officer of the military court, Maj. Glenn Simpkins, has two weeks to weigh the evidence . Some or all charges could be dropped, but if charges remain, he will make a recommendation on how the charges should be dealt with.
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Original:  Pvt. Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence  for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from Fort Leavenworth prison that approval was given to use  dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited  . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
Revised:  Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from Fort Leavenworth prison that approval was given to use dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
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Original:  Pvt. Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence  for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from Fort Leavenworth prison that approval was given to use  dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited  . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
Revised:  Pvt. Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence in Fort Leavenworth for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from Fort Leavenworth prison that approval was given to use dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
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Original:  Pvt. Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence  for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from Fort Leavenworth prison that approval was given to use  dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited  . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
Revised:  Pvt. Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from prison that approval was given to use dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
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Original:  Pvt. Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence  for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from Fort Leavenworth prison that approval was given to use  dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited  . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
Revised:  Pvt. Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from Fort Leavenworth prison that approval was given to use the dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
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Original:  Pvt. Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence  for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from Fort Leavenworth prison that approval was given to use  dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited  . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
Revised:  Pvt. Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from Fort Leavenworth prison that approval was given to use dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited by them . Legislation sponsored by several Senate Republicans seeks to specifically regulate the treatment of prisoners at Guantanamo and other military prisons.
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Original:  The memos warned it would heighten danger for U.S. troops caught by the enemy
Revised:  The memos noted it would heighten danger for U.S. troops caught by the enemy
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Original:  The memos warned it would heighten danger for U.S. troops caught by the enemy
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Original:  The memos noted it would heighten the dangers for U.S. troops caught by the enemy  [ [  
Revised:  The memos noted it would heighten the dangers for U.S. troops caught by the enemy . [ [ 
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Original:  The memos noted it would heighten the dangers for U.S. troops caught by the enemy  [ [  
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Original:  During the defendants testimony yesterday, they said the interrogation techniques they used on prisoners were learned from a team of interrogators dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
Revised:  During the defendants testimony yesterday, they said the interrogation techniques used on prisoners were learned from a team of interrogators dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
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Original:  During the defendants testimony yesterday, they said the interrogation techniques they used on prisoners were learned from a team of interrogators dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
Revised:  During the defendants testimony yesterday, they said the interrogation techniques they used on prisoners was learned from a team of interrogators dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
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