wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The presidential election would be held on September 06, 2008, Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan Kunwar Dilshad has announced this on August 22, 2008.
Revised: The presidential election will be held on September 06, 2008, Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan Kunwar Dilshad has announced this on August 22, 2008.
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Original: The presidential election would be held on September 06, 2008, Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan Kunwar Dilshad has announced this on August 22, 2008.
Revised: The presidential election would be held on September 06, 2008, Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan Kunwar Dilshad announced on August 22, 2008.
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Original: The presidential election will be held on September 06, 2008, Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan Kunwar Dilshad announced on August 22  , 2008.
Revised: The Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan Kunwar Dilshad announced on August 22 , 2008.
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Original: The presidential election will be held on September 06, 2008, Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan Kunwar Dilshad announced on August 22  , 2008.
Revised: The presidential election will be held on September 06, 2008, Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan , Kanwar Dilshad, announced on August 22 , 2008.
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Original: The presidential election will be held on September 06, 2008, Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan Kunwar Dilshad announced on August 22  , 2008.
Revised: The presidential election will be held on September 06, 2008, Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan Kunwar Dilshad announced on August 22 , 2008 that the presidential election will be held on September 06 , 2008.
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Original: The Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan, Kanwar Dilshad, announced on August 22, 2008 that the presidential election will be held on September 06 , 2008.
Revised: The Secretary Election Commission of Pakistan, Kanwar Dilshad, announced on August 22, 2008 that the presidential election will be held on September 6 , 2008.
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Original: Researchers say that two men claiming to be 'Bigfoot' hunters in Georgia in the United States and who claimed to have had found the remains of the mythical creature earlier this month, are said to be part of an elaborate hoax.
Revised: Researchers say that two men claiming to be 'Bigfoot' hunters in Georgia in the United States and who claimed to have had found the remains of the mythical creature earlier this month, are part of an elaborate hoax.
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Original:  Bigfoot hunters Matt Whitton and Rick Dyer stated on August 15, 2008 that they were hunting for the creature in the forests of Northeastern Georgia when they came across the  corpse of one of the alleged animals . After finding the body, they took it home where they stored it in a freezer.
Revised:  Bigfoot hunters Matt Whitton and Rick Dyer stated on August 15, 2008 that they were hunting for the creature in the forests of northeastern Georgia when they came across the corpse of one of the alleged animals . After finding the body, they took it home where they stored it in a freezer.
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Original:  Bigfoot hunters Matt Whitton and Rick Dyer stated on August 15, 2008 that they were hunting for the creature in the forests of Northeastern Georgia when they came across the  corpse of one of the alleged animals . After finding the body, they took it home where they stored it in a freezer.
Revised:  Bigfoot hunters Matt Whitton and Rick Dyer stated on August 15, 2008 that they were hunting for the creature in the forests of Northeastern Georgia when they came across the supposed corpse of one of the alleged animals . After finding the body, they took it home where they stored it in a freezer.
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Original:  Bigfoot hunters Matt Whitton and Rick Dyer stated on August 15, 2008 that they were hunting for the creature in the forests of Northeastern Georgia when they came across the  corpse of one of the alleged animals . After finding the body, they took it home where they stored it in a freezer.
Revised:  Bigfoot hunters Matt Whitton and Rick Dyer stated on August 15, 2008 that they were hunting for the creature in the forests of Northeastern Georgia when they came across the corpse of one of the legendary cryptozooids . After finding the body, they took it home where they stored it in a freezer.
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Original:  Bigfoot hunters Matt Whitton and Rick Dyer stated on August 15, 2008 that they were hunting for the creature in the forests of Northeastern Georgia when they came across the  corpse of one of the alleged animals . After finding the body, they took it home where they stored it in a freezer.
Revised:  Bigfoot hunters Matt Whitton and Rick Dyer stated on August 15, 2008 that they were hunting for the creature in the forests of Northeastern Georgia when they came across the corpse of one of the alleged animals . After finding the body, they claimed to have taken it home where they stored it in a freezer.
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Original:  A group called Searching For Bigfoot Inc. stated that they paid the hunters "an undisclosed sum" of money for all publicity related to the alleged corpse , but when researchers Tom Biscardi and Robert Schmalzbach went to examine the remains of the thawing body, they began to discover that it was nothing more than a plastic Halloween costume.
Revised:  A group called Searching For Bigfoot Inc. stated that they paid the hunters "an undisclosed sum" of money for all publicity related to the alleged carcass , but when researchers Tom Biscardi and Robert Schmalzbach went to examine the remains of the thawing body, they began to discover that it was nothing more than a plastic Halloween costume.
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Original:  The researchers then attempted to regain their money and went to the hotel Whitton and Dyer were staying in, only to find the rooms empty, and the two men no where to be found.
Revised:  The researchers then attempted to reclaim their money and went to the hotel Whitton and Dyer were staying in, only to find the rooms empty, and the two men no where to be found.
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Original:  The researchers then attempted to regain their money and went to the hotel Whitton and Dyer were staying in, only to find the rooms empty, and the two men no where to be found.
Revised:  The researchers then attempted to regain their money and went to the hotel Whitton and Dyer were staying in, only to find the rooms empty, and the two men nowhere to be found.
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Original:  Whitton and Dyer claimed they had photos, video and DNA evidence to support their claim, but only one photo portraying a blurred black figure in the forest, off in the distance, was provided.
Revised:  Whitton and Dyer claimed they had photos, video and DNA evidence to support their claim, but only one photo portraying a blurred black figure in the distance in the forest was provided.
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Original:  He was one of the first African leaders to critisise Robert Mugabe   .
Revised:  He was one of the first African leaders to critisise Robert Mugabe . .
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Original:  He was one of the first African leaders to critisise Robert Mugabe.
Revised:  He was one of the first African leaders to criticise Robert Mugabe.
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Original: A spokesman for S.A.M.U.R. , stated that there were only 26 survivors.
Revised: A spokesman for S.A.M.U.R. stated that there were only 26 survivors.
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Original:  "We stand ready to provide technical assistance.  
Revised:  "We stand ready to provide technical assistance. " 
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Original:  " Although the Spanish government assured that within 24 hours every single corpse would be identified, one week later there are still two dozens of unidentified bodies
Revised:  Although the Spanish government assured that within 24 hours every single corpse would be identified, one week later there are still two dozens of unidentified bodies
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Original:  " Although the Spanish government assured that within 24 hours every single corpse would be identified, one week later there are still two dozens of unidentified bodies
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Original: Hua Guofeng Hua Guofeng, the infamous Chinese leader Mao Zedong 's successor , died this afternoon local time in Beijing at age 87 from an unspecified disease.
Revised: Hua Guofeng Hua Guofeng, the infamous Chinese leader Mao Zedong , died this afternoon local time in Beijing at age 87 from an unspecified disease.
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Original: Hua Guofeng Hua Guofeng, the infamous Chinese leader Mao Zedong 's successor , died this afternoon local time in Beijing at age 87 from an unspecified disease.
Revised: Hua Guofeng Hua Guofeng, the infamous Chinese leader Mao Zedong 's successor , died this afternoon in Beijing at age 87 from an unspecified disease.
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Original: Hua Guofeng Hua Guofeng, the infamous Chinese leader Mao Zedong 's successor , died this afternoon local time in Beijing at age 87 from an unspecified disease.
Revised: Hua Guofeng Hua Guofeng, the infamous Chinese leader Mao Zedong 's successor , died this afternoon local time in Beijing at age 87 from an undisclosed disease.
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Original:  A prolific Communist Party member since the age of 15, he reportedly caught Mao Zedong 's eye in 1954.
Revised:  A prolific Communist Party member since the age of 15, he became known Mao Zedong in 1954, and as a result rose quickly through the party ranks.
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Original:  After succeeding Zhou Enlai as China's prime minister, Mao chose Guofeng as his successoron his deathbed .
Revised:  After he succeeded Zhou Enlai as China's prime minister, Mao chose Guofeng as his successoron his deathbed .
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Original:  After succeeding Zhou Enlai as China's prime minister, Mao chose Guofeng as his successoron his deathbed .
Revised:  After succeeding Zhou Enlai as China's prime minister, Guofeng was chosen by the dying Mao to be his successor .
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Original:  He was effectively ousted in 1978 as a result of Deng Xiaoping's increasing grip on the Communist Party.
Revised:  He was effectively ousted in 1978 as a result of Deng Xiaoping's increasingly strong grip on the Communist Party.
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Original:  A prolific Communist Party member since the age of 15, he became known  Mao Zedong in 1954, and as a result rose quickly through the party ranks.
Revised:  A prolific Communist Party member since the age of 15, he became known to Mao Zedong in 1954, and as a result rose quickly through the party ranks.
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Original:  Guofeng was replaced as Premier in 1980 after four years of service 
Revised:  Guofeng was replaced as Premier in 1980 after four years of service .
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Original:    He was effectively ousted in 1978 as a result of Deng Xiaoping's increasingly strong grip on the Communist Party.
Revised:  A vain leader, Hua had the National People's Congress, the CPC Party Congress and all schools hang portraits of Mao side-by-side with himself in prominent positions. Hua also attempted to change the Chinese national anthem's lyrics to incorporate Mao Zedong, however these revisions were rejected. He was effectively ousted in 1978 as a result of Deng Xiaoping's increasingly strong grip on the Communist Party.
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Original:  Guofeng was replaced as Premier in 1980 after four years of service
Revised:  Guofeng was replaced as Premier in 1980 ending four years of service
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Original: After he succeeded Zhou Enlai as China's prime minister , Guofeng was chosen by the dying Mao to be his successor.
Revised: After he succeeded Zhou Enlai as China's Premier , Guofeng was chosen by the dying Mao to be his successor.
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Original:  A vain leader, Hua had the National People's Congress, the CPC Party Congress  and all schools hang portraits of Mao side-by-side with himself in prominent positions.
Revised:  A vain leader, Hua had the National People's Congress, the CPC Party Congress , and all schools hang portraits of Mao side-by-side with himself in prominent positions.
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Original: Other news Liudmyla Blonska fails drugs test Liudmyla Blonska may be stripped of her silver medal Liudmyla Blonska, who was a silver medalist in the heptathlon  .
Revised: Other news Liudmyla Blonska fails drugs test Liudmyla Blonska may be stripped of her silver medal Liudmyla Blonska, who was a silver medallist in the heptathlon .
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Original: Other news Liudmyla Blonska fails drugs test Liudmyla Blonska may be stripped of her silver medal Liudmyla Blonska, who was a silver medallist in the heptathlon may be stripped of her medal due to suspected doping .
Revised: Other news Liudmyla Blonska fails drugs test Liudmyla Blonska may be stripped of her silver medal Liudmyla Blonska, who was a silver medallist in the heptathlon is suspected of using illegal substances .
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Original:  You come out every day to be a champion and I'm just happy," said Bold , after the race.
Revised:  You come out every day to be a champion and I'm just happy," said Bolt , after the race.
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Original: Other news Liudmyla Blonska fails drugs test Liudmyla Blonska may be stripped of her silver medal Liudmyla Blonska, who was a silver medallist in the heptathlon is suspected of using illegal substances.
Revised: Other news Liudmyla Blonska fails drugs test Liudmyla Blonska may be stripped of her silver medal Liudmyla Blonska, who won silver in the heptathlon is suspected of using illegal substances.
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Original:  Kelly Sotherton, who competed with Bloska, has criticised the athlete.
Revised:  Kelly Sotherton, who competed against Bloska, criticised the athlete.
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Original:  Japan will play South Korea in the bronze medal round, while Cuba and the United States will compete for the gold medal.
Revised:  Japan will play the United States in the bronze medal round, while Cuba and the United States will compete for the gold medal.
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Original:  Japan will play South Korea in the bronze medal round, while Cuba and the United States will compete for the gold medal.
Revised:  Japan will play South Korea in the bronze medal round, while Cuba and South Korea will compete for the gold medal.
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Original:  Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has been diagnosed with cervical cancer.
Revised: British television celebrity Jade Goody of Big Brother fame has been diagnosed with cervical cancer.
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Original:  Goody, 27, arrived in London Heathrow Airport on Tuesday night, having cut short her stay in the Indian version of Celebrity Big Brother, known as "Bigg Boss" . Goody was a controversial character in last year's Big Brother, sparking over 40,000 complaints to Ofcom, the British broadcasting regulator after she allegedly made racist and defamatory remarks to fellow housemate Shilpa Shetty.
Revised:  Goody, 27, arrived in London Heathrow Airport on Tuesday night, having cut short her stay in the Indian version of Celebrity Big Brother, known as Bigg Boss . Goody was a controversial character in last year's Big Brother, sparking over 40,000 complaints to Ofcom, the British broadcasting regulator after she allegedly made racist and defamatory remarks to fellow housemate Shilpa Shetty.
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Original:  Shetty is hosting the show, and has stated  " her prayers are with Jade ".
Revised:  Shetty is hosting the show, and has stated that her " her prayers are with Jade ".
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Original:  Shetty is hosting the show, and has stated  " her prayers are with Jade ".
Revised:  Shetty is hosting the show, and has stated " prayers are with Jade ".
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Original:  Shetty is hosting the show, and has stated  " her prayers are with Jade ".
Revised:  Shetty is hosting the show, and has stated " her prayers are with Jade ."
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Original: She has stated she agreed to take part on the Indian version of the show as an attempt to make up for her behaviour last year.
Revised: Goody has stated she agreed to take part on the Indian version of the show as an attempt to make up for her behaviour last year.
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Original:  She is said to have been on a contract worth £100,000 with Bigg Boss before her departure.
Revised:  Goody is said to have been on a contract worth £100,000 with Bigg Boss before her departure.
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Original:  She is said to have been on a contract worth £100,000 with Bigg Boss before her departure.
Revised:  She is said to have signed a contract worth £100,000 with Bigg Boss before her departure.
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Original:  She is to undergo more tests to see how far the cancer has spread
Revised:  She is expected to undergo medical tests so doctors can see how far the cancer has spread
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Original: Goody is said to have signed a contract worth £100,000 with Bigg Boss before her departure  .
Revised: Goody is said to have signed a contract worth £100,000 with Bigg Boss before her departure from the show .
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Original: Jones was observed by police driving erratically on the evening of 19 August , 2008.
Revised: Jones was observed by police driving erratically on the evening of August 19 , 2008.
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Original:  She never regained consciousness   
Revised:  She never regained consciousness . 
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Original:  As a public servant, she has stood firm with, and for, so many of us and I am asking everyone to take a moment to pray that she makes a full recovery.   
Revised:  As a public servant, she has stood firm with, and for, so many of us and I am asking everyone to take a moment to pray that she makes a full recovery. " 
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Original:  Florida Governor Charlie Crist commented, "This storm has been hanging around and hanging around and hanging around, and she's going to be around for a while longer.   
Revised:  Florida Governor Charlie Crist commented, "This storm has been hanging around and hanging around and hanging around, and she's going to be around for a while longer. " 
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Original:  On Thursday President George  Bush issued a federal disaster declaration allows for the Department of Homeland Security to use federal funds to account for 75\% of debris removal costs.
Revised:  On Thursday President George W. Bush issued a federal disaster declaration allows for the Department of Homeland Security to use federal funds to account for 75\% of debris removal costs.
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Original: Image:Fay 19 aug 2008 1615Z.jpg|NASA satellite photo of Fay on August 19, 2008.
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Original:  On Thursday President George W. Bush issued a federal disaster declaration allows for the Department of Homeland Security to use federal funds to account for 75\% of  debris removal costs.
Revised:  On Thursday President George W. Bush issued a federal disaster declaration allows for the Department of Homeland Security to use federal funds to pay for 75\% of debris removal costs.
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Original:  On Thursday President George W. Bush issued a federal disaster declaration allows for the Department of Homeland Security to use federal funds to account for 75\% of  debris removal costs.
Revised:  On Thursday President George W. Bush issued a federal disaster declaration allows for the Department of Homeland Security to use federal funds to account for 75\% of the debris removal costs.
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Original:  [[Image:Fay 19 aug 2008 1615Z.jpg|NASA satellite photo of Fay on August 19, 2008.]] Gary Redwine of Merritt Island near Cape Canaveral was so sick of waiting inside he hopped on a kayak to tour around the neighbourhood to inspect the debris.
Revised:  [[Image:Fay 19 aug 2008 1615Z.jpg|NASA satellite photo of Fay on August 19, 2008.]] Gary Redwine of Merritt Island near Cape Canaveral was so sick of waiting inside he hopped in a kayak to tour around the neighbourhood to inspect the debris.
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Original:  On Thursday President George W. Bush issued a federal disaster declaration  allows for the Department of Homeland Security to use federal funds to pay for 75\% of the debris removal costs.
Revised:  On Thursday President George W. Bush issued a federal disaster declaration that allows for the Department of Homeland Security to use federal funds to pay for 75\% of the debris removal costs.
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Original:  Picture of Vice Presidential Candidate Joe Biden Prior to the announcement of Biden being the VP candidate, Evan Bayh, Hillary Clinton, Chet Edwards, Tim Kaine, Bill Richardson, and Nancy Sebelius had all been reported as being on the short list.
Revised:  Joe Biden Prior to the announcement of Biden being the VP candidate, Evan Bayh, Hillary Clinton, Chet Edwards, Tim Kaine, Bill Richardson, and Nancy Sebelius had all been reported as being on the short list.
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Original: Senator Barack Obama from Illinois, the presumptive nominee of the Democratic Party, announced his choice for Vice President as Joe Biden .
Revised: Senator Barack Obama from Illinois, the presumptive nominee of the Democratic Party, announced Joe Biden as his Vice Presidential running mate .
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Original:  On August 19th, Biden while leaving his house reportedly said to some reporters, " hey guys, I'm not the guy."
Revised:  On August 19th, Biden while leaving his house reportedly said to some reporters, " Hey guys, I'm not the guy."
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Original:  On August 20th the Obama campaign reportedly sent a email to select news agency with the subject being "Vice presidential...". However, the contents of the email did not state who he had picked, but instead the first line of the email was "just kidding."
Revised:  On August 20th the Obama campaign reportedly sent a email to one or more news agencies with the subject being "Vice presidential...". However, the contents of the email did not state who he had picked, but instead the first line of the email was "just kidding."
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Original:  In recent years, an awareness of the energy that is required to produce , transport and recycle the product has spread nation-wide.
Revised:  In recent years, an awareness of the energy that is required to manufacture , transport and recycle the product has spread nation-wide.
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Original:  They also point out that the water that goes into bottled water products are not inspected as frequently as tap water in Canadian cities.
Revised:  They also point out that the water that goes into bottled water products is not inspected as frequently as tap water in Canadian cities.
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Original:  Spokesman Scott Tabachnick for Coca-Cola Co  , which produces Dasani brand bottled water, commented on the convenience of the product: "It's hard to bring your kitchen sink with you."
Revised:  Spokesman Scott Tabachnick for Coca-Cola Co . , which produces Dasani brand bottled water, commented on the convenience of the product: "It's hard to bring your kitchen sink with you."
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Original:   11 day time laps
Revised:  (Meanwhile however, the Martians are believed to have been setting other sand traps in the expected path of the rover.) 11 day time laps
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Original:  Image credit: NASA/JPL. Rear Hazard Avoidance camera image shows Opportunity free from the deep trench Image credit: NASA/JPL. The Mars rover Opportunity has successfully escaped from a sand trap.
Revised:  Image credit: NASA/JPL. The Mars rover Opportunity has successfully escaped from a sand trap.
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Original:  Engineers worked for nearly five weeks to carefully maneuver the rover out of the sand dune. thumbnail|11 day time lapse animation of the right front whee
Revised:  Engineers worked for nearly five weeks to carefully maneuver the rover out of the sand dune. thumbnail|11 day time laps
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