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Original:  However , after the fall of Manerplaw, the Tatmadaw was able to advance  south and capture Kawmoora on 21 February 1995 after over two months of fighting.
Revised:  However after the Fall of Manerplaw, the Tatmadaw was able to advance south and capture Kawmoora on 21 February 1995 after over two months of fighting.
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Original:  It was completely surrounded by Thailand, and had a narrow strip of land connecting it to the rest of Myanmar, fortified by a 50 meter long border wall.
Revised:  It was completely surrounded by Thailand, and had a narrow strip of land connecting it to the rest of Myanmar, fortified by a long border wall.
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Original:  Battle After the fall of Manerplaw, the Tatmadaw was able to advance south and reach Kawmoora on 19 December 1994;
Revised:  Battle After the Fall of Manerplaw, the Tatmadaw was able to advance south and reach Kawmoora on 19 December 1994;
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Original:  however, Thai authorities refused to allow the Tatmadaw into Thai territory, and thus the only way into Kawmoora was through a narrow 150 meter wide strip of land connecting it to the rest of Myanmar.
Revised:  however, Thai authorities refused to allow the Tatmadaw into Thai territory, and thus the only way into Kawmoora was through a narrow wide strip of land connecting it to the rest of Myanmar.
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Original:  Concrete bunkers built by the Karen National Liberation Army (KNLA) guarded the entrance into Kawmoora, which halted infantry advances by the Tatmadaw.
Revised:  Concrete bunkers built by the Karen National Liberation Army (KNLA) guarded the entrance into Kawmoora, which halted infantry offensives by the Tatmadaw.
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Original:  Chinese-manufactured 210mm breach loading siege mortars were used to destroy the front-line bunkers of the KNLA, allowing soldiers to advance into Kawmoora.
Revised:  Chinese-manufactured 210mm breach loading siege mortars were used to destroy the front-line bunkers of the KNLA, allowing soldiers to enter into Kawmoora.
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Original:  Over its nearly ten-year history , three foreigners had been killed in Kawmoora: an American, a Belgian and a Japanese citizen.
Revised:  Over its nearly ten-year existence , three foreigners had been killed in Kawmoora: an American, a Belgian and a Japanese citizen.
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Original:  It has also been alleged that several Chinese military advisers for the Myanmar Army had also been killed in Kawmoora.
Revised:  It has also been alleged that several Chinese military advisors for the Myanmar Army had also been killed in Kawmoora.
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Original:  It has also been alleged that several Chinese military advisers for the Myanmar Army had also been killed in Kawmoora.
Revised:  It has also been alleged that several Chinese military advisers for the Myanmar Army died in Kawmoora.
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Original: For nearly a decade , the Tatmadaw had been unable to capture Kawmoora through Burmese territory, and instead relied on the permission of Thai authorities to launch artillery from Thai territory at enemy positions inside the stronghold.
Revised: For decades , the Tatmadaw had been unable to capture Kawmoora through Burmese territory, and instead relied on the permission of Thai authorities to launch artillery from Thai territory at enemy positions inside the stronghold.
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Original:  The paper went on the become the most downloaded paper in the Public Library of ScienceMedicine - Stanford Prevention Research Center.
Revised:  The paper went on to become the most downloaded paper in the Public Library of ScienceMedicine - Stanford Prevention Research Center.
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Original: Evaluation  Incentives Metascience seeks to promote better research through better incentive systems.
Revised: Evaluation Metascience seeks to promote better research through better incentive systems.
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Original:  According to Brian Nosek, “ The problem that we face is that the incentive system is focused almost entirely on getting research published, rather than on getting research right.
Revised:  According to Brian Nosek, " The problem that we face is that the incentive system is focused almost entirely on getting research published, rather than on getting research right.
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Original:  ” Proponents of reform seek to structure the incentive system to favor higher-quality results.
Revised:  " Proponents of reform seek to structure the incentive system to favor higher-quality results.
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Original:  Reforms   [ [ [ [ [     ]   ]        Meta-research identifying flaws in scientific practice has inspired reforms in science.
Revised:  Reforms Factors other than a submission's merits can substantially influence peer reviewers' evaluations. Such factors may however also be important such as the use of track-records about the veracity of a researchers' prior publications and its alignment with public interests. Nevertheless, evaluation systems – include those of peer-review – may substantially lack mechanisms and criteria that are oriented or well-performingly oriented towards merit, real-world positive impact, progress and public usefulness rather than analytical indicators such as number of citations or altmetric even when such can be used as partial indicators of such ends. [ [ [ [ [ ] ] Meta-research identifying flaws in scientific practice has inspired reforms in science.
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Original:  Reforms   [ [ [ [ [     ]   ]        Meta-research identifying flaws in scientific practice has inspired reforms in science.
Revised:  Reforms [ [ [ [ [ ). ] ] Meta-research identifying flaws in scientific practice has inspired reforms in science.
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Original:  Reforms   [ [ [ [ [     ]   ]        Meta-research identifying flaws in scientific practice has inspired reforms in science.
Revised:  Reforms [ [ [ [ [ ] ] Reforms Meta-research identifying flaws in scientific practice has inspired reforms in science.
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Original:  A study found found that the "main incentive academics are offered for using social media is amplification" and that it should be "moving towards an institutional culture that focuses more on how these [or such] platforms can facilitate real engagement with research".
Revised:  A study found that the "main incentive academics are offered for using social media is amplification" and that it should be "moving towards an institutional culture that focuses more on how these [or such] platforms can facilitate real engagement with research".
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Original:  In 2005, John Ioannidis published a paper titled "Why Most Published Research Findings Are False", which argued that a majority a papers in the medical field produce conclusions that are wrong.
Revised:  In 2005, John Ioannidis published a paper titled "Why Most Published Research Findings Are False", which argued that a majority of papers in the medical field produce conclusions that are wrong.
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Original:  She could not continued her job after marriage.
Revised:  She could not continue her job after marriage.
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Original:  From 1947, Dr Fatima Shah worked for the rehabilitation of refugee women who migrated to Pakistan from India, following independence in 1947 Women with disabilities , ref 1822 URL Shah was also one of the founding members of the All Pakistan Women’s Association which was founded in 1949.
Revised:  From 1947, Shah worked for the rehabilitation of refugee women who migrated to Pakistan from India, following independence in 1947 Women with disabilities , ref 1822 URL Shah was also one of the founding members of the All Pakistan Women’s Association which was founded in 1949.
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Original:  From 1947, Dr Fatima Shah worked for the rehabilitation of refugee women who migrated to Pakistan from India, following independence in 1947 Women with disabilities , ref 1822 URL Shah was also one of the founding members of the All Pakistan Women’s Association which was founded in 1949.
Revised:  From 1947, Dr Fatima Shah worked for the rehabilitation of refugee women who migrated to Pakistan from India, following independence in 1947. Women with disabilities , ref 1822 URL Shah was also one of the founding members of the All Pakistan Women’s Association which was founded in 1949.
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Original:  She had two daughters.
Revised:  She had two 
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Original:  She was a leading gynecologist of the Civil Hospital, Karachi till the sudden onset of blindness through retinitis pigmentosa in  1957.
Revised:  She was a leading gynecologist of the Civil Hospital, Karachi till the onset of blindness through retinitis pigmentosa in 1957.
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Original:  She played a significant role in the establishment of a global body called the World Blind Union and also became a member of the Federal Council National Parliament   .
Revised:  She played a significant role in the establishment of a global body called the World Blind Union and also became a member of the Federal Council National Parliament . .
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Original: Fatima Shah (1914 - October 12, 2002) was a  physician, social worker and advocate for the blind in Pakistan.
Revised: Fatima Shah (1914 – October 12, 2002) was a physician, social worker and advocate for the blind in Pakistan.
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Original:  She became the second vice-president of the IFB.
Revised:  She be xxxme the second vice-president of the IFB.
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Original:  She be xxxme the second vice-president of the IFB.
Revised:  She became the second vice-president of the IFB.
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Original:  Félix-Roland Moumié (1926 – 3 November 1960) was an anti-colonialist Cameroonian leader, assassinated in Geneva on 3 November 1960 by a former agent of the SDECE (French secret service) probably at the request of Cameroonian authorities with thallium, following official independence from France earlier that year.
Revised:  Félix-Roland Moumié (1926 – 3 November 1960) was an anti-colonialist Cameroonian leader, assassinated in Geneva on 3 November 1960 by a agent of the SDECE (French secret service) probably at the request of Cameroonian authorities with thallium, following official independence from France earlier that year.
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Original:  Félix-Roland Moumié (1926 – 3 November 1960) was an anti-colonialist Cameroonian leader, assassinated in Geneva on 3 November 1960 by a former agent of the SDECE (French secret service) probably at the request of Cameroonian authorities with thallium, following official independence from France earlier that year.
Revised:  Félix-Roland Moumié (1926 – 3 November 1960) was an anti-colonialist Cameroonian leader, assassinated in Geneva on 3 November 1960 by a former agent of the SDECE (French secret service) with thallium, following official independence from France earlier that year.
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Original:  Documentary : DEATH IN GENEVA - The Poisoning of Félix Moumié Félix-Roland Moumié succeeded Ruben Um Nyobé, who was killed in September 1958, as leader of the Union des Populations du Cameroun (UPC - or also Union du Peuple Camerounais — "Cameroon's People Union")      
Revised:  Documentary : DEATH IN GENEVA - The Poisoning of Félix Moumié Félix-Roland Moumié succeeded Ruben Um Nyobé, who was killed in September 1958, as leader of the Union des Populations du Cameroun (UPC - or also Union du Peuple Camerounais — "Cameroon's People Union") . 
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Original: Knowing that he is constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensures that he never overflies French territory and avoids as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
Revised: Knowing that he was constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensures that he never overflies French territory and avoids as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
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Original: Knowing that he is constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensures that he never overflies French territory and avoids as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
Revised: Knowing that he is constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensured that he never overflies French territory and avoids as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
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Original: Knowing that he is constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensures that he never overflies French territory and avoids as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
Revised: Knowing that he is constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensures that he never overflew French territory and avoids as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
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Original: Knowing that he is constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensures that he never overflies French territory and avoids as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
Revised: Knowing that he is constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensures that he never overflies French territory and avoided as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
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Original:  He fears that his plane will be intercepted as Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders did in 1956.
Revised:  He feared that his plane will be intercepted as Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders did in 1956.
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Original:  He lives mainly between Ghana and Guinea where he seeks to gain support for the UP
Revised:  He lived mainly between Ghana and Guinea where he seeks to gain support for the UP
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Original:  He lives mainly between Ghana and Guinea where he seeks to gain support for the UP
Revised:  He lives mainly between Ghana and Guinea where he seeked to gain support for the UP
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Original:  Documentary : DEATH IN GENEVA - The Poisoning of Félix Moumié Félix-Roland Moumié succeeded Ruben Um Nyobé, who was killed in September 1958, as leader of the Union des Populations du Cameroun (UPC - or also Union du Peuple Camerounais — "Cameroon's People Union") .
Revised:  Documentary : DEATH IN GENEVA - The Poisoning of Félix Moumié Félix-Roland Moumié succeeded Ruben Um Nyobé, who was killed in September 1958, as leader of the Union des Populations du Cameroun (UPC - or also Union du Peuple Camerounais — "Cameroon's People Union") 
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Original:  Documentary : DEATH IN GENEVA - The Poisoning of Félix Moumié Félix-Roland Moumié succeeded Ruben Um Nyobé, who was killed in September 1958, as leader of the Union des Populations du Cameroun (UPC - or also Union du Peuple Camerounais — "Cameroon's People Union") 
Revised:  Documentary : DEATH IN GENEVA - The Poisoning of Félix Moumié Félix-Roland Moumié succeeded Ruben Um Nyobé, who was killed in September 1958, as leader of the Union des Populations du Cameroun (UPC - or also Union du Peuple Camerounais — "Cameroon's People Union") .
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Original:  He feared that his plane will be intercepted as Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders did in 1956.
Revised:  He feared that his plane will be intercepted , the plane of Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders did in 1956.
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Original:  He feared that his plane will be intercepted as Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders did in 1956.
Revised:  He feared that his plane will be intercepted as Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders was in 1956.
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Original:  He feared that his plane will be intercepted,  the plane of Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders was in 1956.
Revised:  He feared that his plane would be intercepted, the plane of Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders was in 1956.
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Original:  He feared that his plane will be intercepted,  the plane of Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders was in 1956.
Revised:  He feared that his plane will be intercepted, as the plane of Ahmed Ben Bella and FLN leaders was in 1956.
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Original:  He began his primary studies at the Bandjo school, continued them at the Protestant school in Njissé, then at the public school in Bafoussam (CMI), and completes them at the regional school in Dschang (CMII) where he brilliantly obtained the primary school certificate.
Revised:  He began his primary studies at the Bandjo school, continued them at the Protestant school in Njissé, then at the public school in Bafoussam (CMI), and completed them at the regional school in Dschang (CMII) where he brilliantly obtained the primary school certificate.
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Original:  He was sensitized to anti-colonialist and communist ideas during his academic period , notably with Gabriel d'Arboussier (the future Secretary General of the African Democratic Rally) and the historian Jean Suret-Canale In April 1958, he attended the "Conference of Independent African States" organized by the Ghanaian President Kwame Nkrumah.
Revised:  He was sensitized to anti-colonialist and communist ideas during his studies , notably with Gabriel d'Arboussier (the future Secretary General of the African Democratic Rally) and the historian Jean Suret-Canale In April 1958, he attended the "Conference of Independent African States" organized by the Ghanaian President Kwame Nkrumah.
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Original:  Accompanied by Osendé Afana, he went to Congo in 1960 to meet with President Patrice Lumumba, who had shown sympathy for the upecist cause, but he was then overthrown by Colonel Mobutu's troops, who drove them out of the country.
Revised:  Accompanied by Osendé Afana, he went to Congo in 1960 to meet with President Patrice Lumumba, who had shown sympathy for the upecist cause, but who was then overthrown by Colonel Mobutu's troops, who drove them out of the country.
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Original:  Knowing that he was constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensured that he never overflew French territory and avoided as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
Revised:  Knowing that he was constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensured that he never flew over French territory and avoided as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
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Original:  Knowing that he was constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensured that he never overflew French territory and avoided as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
Revised:  Knowing that he was constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensured that he never overflew French territory and avoided the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
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Original:  Knowing that he was constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensured that he never overflew French territory and avoided as much as possible the airspace of the countries integrated into the French Community.
Revised:  Knowing that he was constantly under surveillance by the French intelligence services, he ensured that he never overflew French territory and avoided as much as possible the airspace of the countries that were members of the French Community.
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Original: Francis Piol Bol Bok (born February 1979), han kom fra hans fars snaskede klunker også kom han ud af fissen på sin mor a Dinka tribesman and native of South Sudan, was a slave for ten years but became an abolitionist and author living in the United States.
Revised: Francis Piol Bol Bok (born February 1979), han kom ud af fissen på sin mor a Dinka tribesman and native of South Sudan, was a slave for ten years but became an abolitionist and author living in the United States.
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Original:  Culture of assessment has been measured by scholars of perceptions among faculty to determine motivations, sense of support, and levels of fear related to assessment.
Revised:  The culture of assessment has been measured by scholars of perceptions among faculty to determine motivations, sense of support, and levels of fear related to assessment.
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Original:  In 1940 a grant was given to support as gerontologist at the United States Public Heath Service, and Stieglitz was given the post , for a year .
Revised:  In 1940 a grant was given to support a gerontologist at the United States Public Heath Service, and Stieglitz was given the post , for a year .
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Original:  In 1940 a grant was given to support as gerontologist at the United States Public Heath Service, and Stieglitz was given the post , for a year .
Revised:  In 1940 a grant was given to support as gerontologist at the United States Public Heath Service, and Stieglitz was given the post .
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Original: Stieglitz was graduated from Rush Medical College in 1921 and was on the faculty of the University of Chicago from 1923 to 1938.
Revised: Stieglitz graduated from Rush Medical College in 1921 and was on the faculty of the University of Chicago from 1923 to 1938.
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Original:  In 1940 a grant was given to support a gerontologist at the United States Public Heath Service, and Stieglitz was given the post.
Revised:  In 1940 a grant was given to support a gerontologist at the United States Public Health Service, and Stieglitz was given the post.
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Original:  Newspaper advertisements for The Second Forty Years are probably the source for the popular quotation "It ’ s not the years in your life that count, it ’ s the life in your years", which is commonly misattributed to Abraham Lincoln.
Revised:  Newspaper advertisements for The Second Forty Years are probably the source for the popular quotation "It ' s not the years in your life that count, it ’ s the life in your years", which is commonly misattributed to Abraham Lincoln.
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Original:  Newspaper advertisements for The Second Forty Years are probably the source for the popular quotation "It ’ s not the years in your life that count, it ’ s the life in your years", which is commonly misattributed to Abraham Lincoln.
Revised:  Newspaper advertisements for The Second Forty Years are probably the source for the popular quotation "It ’ s not the years in your life that count, it ' s the life in your years", which is commonly misattributed to Abraham Lincoln.
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Original:  He published the semi-covert newspaper Khorāsān,The first edition of Khorāsān was published on March 19 , 1909. in collaboration with Hossein Ardebili, Nou-bahār (New Spring), and Tāzeh-bahār (Fresh Spring), both in collaboration with his cousin Haj Sheikh Ahmad Bahar who operated a printing company and who acted as the Senior Editor first in Mashhad and later in Tehran.
Revised:  He published the semi-covert newspaper Khorāsān,The first edition of Khorāsān was published on 19 , 1909. in collaboration with Hossein Ardebili, Nou-bahār (New Spring), and Tāzeh-bahār (Fresh Spring), both in collaboration with his cousin Haj Sheikh Ahmad Bahar who operated a printing company and who acted as the Senior Editor first in Mashhad and later in Tehran.
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Original:  He died on April 21 , 1951,1 Ordibehesht 1330 AH, at 8 O'clock in the morning. at his home in Tehran.
Revised:  He died on 21 , 1951,1 Ordibehesht 1330 AH, at 8 O'clock in the morning. at his home in Tehran.
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Original:  He is entombed in Zahir o-Dowleh Cemetery in Darband, located in Shemiran, north of Tehran.
Revised:  He is entombed in Zahir o-dowleh Cemetery in Darband, located in Shemiran, north of Tehran.
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