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Original:  Six year old Thomas David Horne died and eleven others were injured Friday when their plane crashed in Canaima National Park  on a sight seeing tour to the world's tallest  Angel Falls.
Revised:  Six year old Thomas David Horne died and eleven others were injured Friday when their plane crashed in Canaima National Park . They were on a sight seeing tour to the world's tallest Angel Falls.
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Original:  Six year old Thomas David Horne died and eleven others were injured Friday when their plane crashed in Canaima National Park  on a sight seeing tour to the world's tallest  Angel Falls.
Revised:  Six year old Thomas David Horne died and eleven others were injured Friday when their plane crashed in Canaima National Park on a sight seeing tour of the world's tallest Angel Falls.
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Original:  The single engine  nine-seater Cessna 208 Caravan, lifted off shortly before the end of the runway, lost power, and then surged briefly before plummeting into the Venezuelan jungle in front of the 3,200 ft falls.
Revised:  The single engine , nine-seater Cessna 208 Caravan, lifted off shortly before the end of the runway, lost power, and then surged briefly before plummeting into the Venezuelan jungle in front of the 3,200 ft falls.
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Original:  “ It started to take off and we sensed it was losing power.
Revised:  " It started to take off and we sensed it was losing power.
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Original:  Then it dived into the trees .” reported Makeli Freire another park tour guide.
Revised:  Then it dived into the trees ," reported Makeli Freire another park tour guide.
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Original:  Then it dived into the trees .” reported Makeli Freire another park tour guide.
Revised:  Then it dived into the trees .” reported Makeli Freire , a park tour guide.
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Original:  Three of the injured sustained serious injuries, and the injuries of the others were mainly broken bones.
Revised:  Three of the injured sustained serious injuries, while the others suffered mainly broken bones.
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Original:  Liz and her husband Keith Grainger and S. Phillips were also Britishtourists injured in the crash.
Revised:  Liz and her husband Keith Grainger and S. Phillips , British, tourists were also injured in the crash.
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Original:  Liz and her husband Keith Grainger and S. Phillips, British, tourists were also injured in the crash.
Revised:  Liz and her husband Keith Grainger and S. Phillips, also British tourists, were also injured in the crash.
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Original:  Six year old Thomas David Horne from the United Kingdom has died and eleven other British tourists were injured Friday when their plane crashed in Canaima National Park in Venezuela.
Revised:  Six-year-old Thomas David Horne from the United Kingdom has died and eleven other British tourists were injured Friday when their plane crashed in Canaima National Park in Venezuela.
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Original:  The vessel involved in the incident was the 65-metre, 1  850 Pompei, en route to the Seychelles islands, located further south.
Revised:  The vessel involved in the incident was the 65-metre, 1 , 850 Pompei, en route to the Seychelles islands, located further south.
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Original:  Benoit Ramacker of the crisis management centre stated that " the ship has been spotted and we can confirm that it has been taken hostage . " 
Revised:  " the ship has been spotted and we can confirm that it has been taken hostage . " 
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Original:  Benoit Ramacker of the crisis management centre stated that " the ship has been spotted and we can confirm that it has been taken hostage . " 
Revised:  Benoit Ramacker of the crisis management centre stated that " The ship has been spotted and we can confirm that it has been taken hostage . " 
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Original:  Benoit Ramacker of the crisis management centre stated that " the ship has been spotted and we can confirm that it has been taken hostage . " 
Revised:  Benoit Ramacker of the crisis management centre stated that " the ship has been spotted and we can confirm that it has been taken hostage , " 
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Original:  Benoit Ramacker of the crisis management centre stated that " the ship has been spotted and we can confirm that it has been taken hostage . " 
Revised:  Benoit Ramacker of the crisis management centre stated that " the ship has been spotted and we can confirm that it has been taken hostage . " Benoit Ramacker of the crisis management centre said.
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Original: Debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls.
Revised: This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls.
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Original:  McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton, both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively     
Revised:  McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton, both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively . 
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Original: File photo of Sebastian Vettel (2008)Photo credit: Mark McArdle at Flickr Shanghai International Circuit Red Bull Racing driver Sebastian Vettel won the rainy 2009 Chinese Grand Prix at the Shanghai International Circuit, Shanghai, China.
Revised: File photo of Sebastian Vettel (2008)Photo credit: Mark McArdle at Flickr Shanghai International Circuit Red Bull Racing driver Sebastian Vettel won the rainy 2009 Chinese Grand Prix at Shanghai International Circuit, Shanghai, China.
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Original:  His teammate Mark Webber came second though with a substantial gap  more than 10 seconds.
Revised:  His teammate Mark Webber came second with a substantial gap more than 10 seconds.
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Original:  His teammate Mark Webber came second though with a substantial gap  more than 10 seconds.
Revised:  His teammate Mark Webber came second though with a substantial gap of more than 10 seconds.
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Original:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
Revised:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quick than in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
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Original:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
Revised:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races , finishing after the Red Bull cars . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
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Original:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
Revised:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profited from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
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Original:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
Revised:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error , finishing in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
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Original:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
Revised:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton ; the pair took fifth and sixth place respectively.
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Original:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth place respectively.
Revised:  This season's debutant Brawn GP team drivers Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello were less quicker then in two previous races finishing after Red Bulls . McLaren-Mercedes driver Heikki Kovalainen profit from his teammate's error and finished in front of Lewis Hamilton , both drivers saw the chequered flag on a fifth and sixth places respectively.
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Original:  Timo Glock came 7th for Toyota, while his teammate Jarno Trulli was taken out by Robert Kubica BMW Sauber smashed into the rear of Trulli's Toyota.
Revised:  Timo Glock came seventh for Toyota, while his teammate Jarno Trulli was taken out by Robert Kubica BMW Sauber smashed into the rear of Trulli's Toyota.
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Original:  Timo Glock came 7th for Toyota, while his teammate Jarno Trulli was taken out by Robert Kubica BMW Sauber smashed into the rear of Trulli's Toyota.
Revised:  Timo Glock came 7th for Toyota, while his teammate Jarno Trulli was taken out by Robert Kubica 's BMW Sauber when it smashed into the rear of Trulli's Toyota.
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Original:  Buemi's teammate Sébastien Bourdais finished 11th .
Revised:  Buemi's teammate Sébastien Bourdais finished eleventh .
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Original:  The start and the first 8 laps behind the safety car forced Fernando Alonso, who qualified second for Renault yesterday, to pit and drop down to the last place.
Revised:  The start and the first eight laps behind the safety car forced Fernando Alonso, who qualified second for Renault yesterday, to pit and drop down to the last place.
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Original:  He finished ninth ahead of Ferrari ’ s Kimi Raikkonen.
Revised:  He finished ninth ahead of Ferrari ' s Kimi Raikkonen.
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Original:  Adrian Sutil's Force India slipped on a wet track and was taken out from the 6th place after Hamilton pushed on him in attempt to regain his lost position to Sutil.
Revised:  Adrian Sutil's Force India slipped on a wet track and was taken out from the sixth place after Hamilton pushed on him in attempt to regain his lost position to Sutil.
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Original:  Adrian Sutil's Force India slipped on a wet track and was taken out from the 6th place after Hamilton pushed on him in attempt to regain his lost position to Sutil.
Revised:  Adrian Sutil's Force India slipped on a wet track and was taken out from the 6th place after Hamilton pushed on him in attempt to regain the position lost to Sutil.
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Original:  Button and Barrichello now leading the championship with 21 and 15 points respectfully .
Revised:  Button and Barrichello now lead the championship with 21 and 15 points respectfully .
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Original:  Button and Barrichello now leading the championship with 21 and 15 points respectfully .
Revised:  Button and Barrichello now leading the championship with 21 and 15 points apiece .
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Original:  Vettel and Glock behind them with 10 points, others less.
Revised:  Vettel and Glock behind them with ten points, others less.
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Original:  Constructor's standings  currently lead by the Brawn-Mercedes team with 36 points, Red Bull and Toyota come up with a distance of 16.5 and 17.5 points behind
Revised:  Constructor's standings are currently lead by the Brawn-Mercedes team with 36 points, Red Bull and Toyota come up with a distance of 16.5 and 17.5 points behind
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Original:  Constructor's standings  currently lead by the Brawn-Mercedes team with 36 points, Red Bull and Toyota come up with a distance of 16.5 and 17.5 points behind
Revised:  Constructor's standings currently lead by the Brawn-Mercedes team with 36 points, Red Bull and Toyota come up at some distance of 16.5 and 17.5 points behind
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Original: Last Thursday, 16 April, 2009, the Russian government announced ending its  counter terrorism operation  in Chechnya.
Revised: Last Thursday, 16 April, 2009, the Russian government announced ending its " counter terrorism operation in Chechnya.
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Original: Last Thursday, 16 April, 2009, the Russian government announced ending its  counter terrorism operation  in Chechnya.
Revised: Last Thursday, 16 April, 2009, the Russian government announced ending its counter terrorism operation " in Chechnya.
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Original: Last Thursday, 16 April, 2009, the Russian government announced ending its "counter terrorism operation" in Chechnya.
Revised: Last Thursday, the Russian government announced ending its "counter terrorism operation" in Chechnya.
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Original: The Russian government announced ending its "counterterrorism operation" in Chechnya effective April 16.
Revised: The Russian government announced the termination of its "counterterrorism operation" in Chechnya effective April 16.
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Original:  The films entered into the festival are separated into different categories and will be judged by a jury of famous human rights activists, writers, film producers, critics, etc.
Revised:  The films entered into the festival are separated into different categories and will be judged by famous human rights activists, writers, film producers, critics, etc.
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Original:  Arch Enemy will replace Gossow with Alissa White-Gluz, the lead singer of an extreme Canadian metal band, The Agonist.
Revised:  Arch Enemy will replace Gossow with Alissa White-Gluz, the lead singer of a Canadian extreme metal band, The Agonist.
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Original:  the most popular Facebook comment reads : “Arch Enemy without Angel Gossow is not Arch Enemy anymore.” Gossow does intend to stay and manage Arch Enemy and other acts as well.
Revised:  the most popular Facebook comment read : “Arch Enemy without Angel Gossow is not Arch Enemy anymore.” Gossow does intend to stay and manage Arch Enemy and other acts as well.
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Original:  the most popular Facebook comment reads : “Arch Enemy without Angel Gossow is not Arch Enemy anymore.” Gossow does intend to stay and manage Arch Enemy and other acts as well.
Revised:  the most popular Facebook comment reads : “Arch Enemy without Angela Gossow is not Arch Enemy anymore.” Gossow does intend to stay and manage Arch Enemy and other acts as well.
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Original:  Benn became a Member of Parliament in 1950 following his father and both grandfathers’ footsteps.
Revised:  Benn became a Member of Parliament in 1950 following in his father's and both grandfathers’ footsteps.
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Original: A welding accident in the basement of a building caused a large fire at the Barangaroo construction site in Sydney, Australia on Wednesday, March twelve.
Revised: An apparent welding accident in the basement of a building caused a large fire at the Barangaroo construction site in Sydney, Australia on Wednesday, March twelve.
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Original:  A large traffic jam developed  as the Western Distributor motorway , part of the Sydney Harbour , and multiple roads in the Sydney Central Business District were closedand gridlocked .
Revised:  A large traffic jam developed in the Sydney Central Business District as the Western Distributor motorway , part of the Sydney Harbour , and multiple roads in the Sydney Central Business District were closedand gridlocked .
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Original:  A large traffic jam developed  as the Western Distributor motorway , part of the Sydney Harbour , and multiple roads in the Sydney Central Business District were closedand gridlocked .
Revised:  A large traffic jam developed as the Western Distributor motorway and part of the Sydney Harbour , and multiple roads in the Sydney Central Business District were closedand gridlocked .
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Original:  All workers at the site and people in the neighboring buildings were evacuated and no injuriesoccurred .
Revised:  All workers at the site and people in the neighboring buildings were evacuated without injuries .
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Original:  All workers at the site and people in the neighboring buildings were evacuated without injuries .
Revised:  All workers at the site and people in the neighboring buildings were evacuated with no injuries reported .
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Original:  Hassan and other inmates reported experiencing water torture techniques, inserting large nose tubes  to deliver food, and force-feeding.
Revised:  Hassan and other inmates reported experiencing water torture techniques, having large nose tubes to deliver food, and force-feeding.
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Original:  Script __NOTOC__  Promo
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Original:  Officials said that pirates tried to flee in the dark, but were caught by a CanadaCanadian vessel.
Revised:  Officials said that pirates tried to flee in the dark, but were caught by a Canadian vessel.
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Original:  Currently, pirates are thought to be holding about three hundred crew members from seventeen ships  
Revised:  Currently, pirates are thought to be holding about three hundred crew members from seventeen ships . 
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Original: Iran has warned Israel that an invasion of its country will will be met with strong defense.
Revised: Iran has warned Israel that an invasion of its country will be met with strong defense.
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Original: The talk of possible war between the two nations come just before Iran's scheduled military parade on Saturday.
Revised: The talk of possible war between the two nations came just before Iran's scheduled military parade on Saturday.
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Original: Inside his checked-in luggage, authorities found a fully loaded semi-automatic handgun, a loaded clip with extra ammunition, a fully armed grenade, bomb making materials which included military fuses, electronic boxes and switches, and model rocket engines.
Revised: Inside his checked-in luggage, authorities found a fully loaded semi-automatic handgun, a loaded magazine with extra ammunition, a fully armed grenade, bomb making materials which included military fuses, electronic boxes and switches, and model rocket engines.
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Original: Reed was arrested for possession of a concealed weapon and unlawful possession of a "infernal machine, " says the Boston Globe.
Revised: Reed was arrested for possession of an infernal machine and possession of a "infernal machine, " says the Boston Globe.
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Original:  The TSA says that it is allowed to have a gun in your checked luggage, so long as it is declared at the gate before checking it in, something Reed did not do.
Revised:  The TSA says that a passenger is allowed to have a gun in your checked luggage, so long as it is declared at the gate before checking it in, something Reed did not do.
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Original:  The TSA says that it is allowed to have a gun in your checked luggage, so long as it is declared at the gate before checking it in, something Reed did not do.
Revised:  The TSA says that it is allowed to have a gun in checked luggage, so long as it is declared at the gate before checking it in, something Reed did not do.
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Original: Inside his checked-in luggage, authorities found a fully loaded semi-automatic handgun, a loaded magazine with extra ammunition, a fully armed grenade , bomb making materials which included military fuses, electronic boxes and switches, and model rocket engines.
Revised: Inside his checked-in luggage, authorities found a semi-automatic handgun, a loaded magazine with extra ammunition, a fully armed grenade , bomb making materials which included military fuses, electronic boxes and switches, and model rocket engines.
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Original: The plane was stormed by Jamaican police at approximately 08:00 local time on 20 April2009 , and succeeded in taking the hijacker into custody and freeing the captives.
Revised: The plane was stormed by Jamaican police in the morning of the 20th of April , and succeeded in taking the hijacker into custody and freeing the captives.
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Original: A single armed gunman took the flight hostage, later letting go all of the passengers , and two of the crew, keeping six crewmembers hostage  .
Revised: A single armed gunman took the flight hostage, later letting go all of the passengers and two of the crew, keeping six crewmembers hostage .
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Original:  According to the BBC, the man broke through security and boarded as the plane was about to take off.
Revised:  The man broke through security and boarded as the plane was about to take off.
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Original:  According to the BBC, the man broke through security and boarded as the plane was about to take off.
Revised:  According to the BBC, the man broke through security and boarded before the plane was about to take off.
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Original:  There were more than 150 passengers on board when the man forced his way onto the plane , demanding ]  passage to Cuba.
Revised:  There were more than 150 passengers on board when the man forced his way onto the plane , demanding ...] passage to Cuba.
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Original:  The plane was stormed by Jamaican police in the morning of the 20th of April, and succeeded in taking the hijacker into custody and freeing the captives.
Revised:  The plane was stormed by Jamaican police in the morning of the 20th of April, who succeeded in taking the hijacker into custody and freeing the captives.
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Original:  They allege that Qureshi tried to sell his daughter for US $$ 290,000 (£200,000) to his brother-in-law Rajan More.
Revised:  They allege that Qureshi tried to sell his daughter for US 290,000 (£200,000) to his brother-in-law Rajan More.
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Original: ," said Moinuddin Qureshi, the uncle of Ali .
Revised: ," said Moinuddin Qureshi, the uncle of Ali 
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