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Original:  Unlike other qualifying sessions, this qualifying session only decided the first and second position, while the others will be decided by the two Gatorade Duels held on February 17.
Revised:  Unlike other qualifying sessions, this qualifying session only decided the first and second position, while the others will be decided by the two held on February 17.
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Original:  All four individuals are thought to be from the same family unit, with one man, one woman and two children among the dead  
Revised:  All four individuals are thought to be from the same family unit, with one man, one woman and two children among the dead . 
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Original:  Inquiries are at an early stage, but officers are not looking for anyone else at this time.  
Revised:  Inquiries are at an early stage, but officers are not looking for anyone else at this time. " 
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Original: Four dead bodies have been discovered in two separate locations within the town of Leicester, in Leicestershire ,  England, United Kingdom.
Revised: Four dead bodies have been discovered in two separate locations within the town of , England, United Kingdom.
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Original: Four dead bodies have been discovered in two separate locations within the town of Leicester, in Leicestershire ,  England, United Kingdom.
Revised: Four dead bodies have been discovered in two separate locations within the town of Leicester, in Leicestershire , in , England, United Kingdom.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Leicestershire Constabulary stated that "[n]o causes of death have been established at present, but the deaths of the woman and children are being treated as suspicious.
Revised:  A spokesperson for stated that "[n]o causes of death have been established at present, but the deaths of the woman and children are being treated as suspicious.
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Original:  According to BBC News , police have been involved in previous incidents with the family
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Original:  The announcment was made by  St. James Palace and was released on Valentines day .
Revised:  The announcment was made by a spokesman at St. James Palace and was released on Valentines day .
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Original:  The announcment was made by  St. James Palace and was released on Valentines day .
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Original:  The announcment was made by a spokesman at St . James Palace.
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Original:  The announcment was made by a spokesman at St . James Palace.
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Original:  It has also been revealed that Prince William's fiancée, Kate Middleton has asked her sister Philippa to be her maid of honour . Prince William and Middleton will marry on April 29th of this year at Westminster Abbey.
Revised:  It has also been revealed that Prince William's fiancée, Kate Middleton has asked her sister Philippa to be her Maid of Honour . Prince William and Middleton will marry on April 29th of this year at Westminster Abbey.
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Original:  As well as the announcments of the best man and maid of honour other plans have been released as well.
Revised:  As well as the announcements of the best man and maid of honour other plans have been released as well.
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Original:  As well as the announcments of the best man and maid of honour other plans have been released as well.
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Original:  However  details of the bridesmaid dresses and page boys uniforms will not be revealed until the day of the wedding
Revised:  However , details of the bridesmaid dresses and page boys uniforms will not be revealed until the day of the wedding
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Original: When it was announced that William and Kate had become engaged Prince Harry commented saying that  "It means I get a sister, which I have always wanted," and that he was "delighted".
Revised: When it was announced that William and Kate had become engaged Prince Harry commented saying that : "It means I get a sister, which I have always wanted," and that he was "delighted".
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Original:  Eight year-old Margarita Armstrong-Jones, who is the daughter of Viscount and Viscountess Linley and three year-old Grace van Cutsem, the daughter of Hugh van Cutsem, who is a close friend to both William and Kate.
Revised:  Eight year-old Margarita Armstrong-Jones, who is the daughter of Viscount and Viscountess Linley and three-year-old Grace van Cutsem, the daughter of Hugh van Cutsem, who is a close friend to both William and Kate.
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Original:  The three year-old granddaughter of the Duchess of Cornwall will be the forth bridesmaid.
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Original: Prince William and Prince Harry in 2009 Prince William of Wales has selected his brother Prince Harry to be the best man at his wedding.
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Original: Prince William and Prince Harry in 2009 Prince William of Wales has selected his brother Prince Harry to be the best man at his wedding.
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Original: Prince William and Prince Harry in 2009 Prince William of Wales has selected his brother Prince Harry to be the best man at his wedding.
Revised: Prince William and Prince Harry in 2009 Prince William of Wales has selected his brother Prince Harry to be the at his wedding.
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Original:  The announcement was made by a spokesman at St James's Palace .
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Original:  Emissions of nitrogen oxide contribute to and are thought to have caused a rise in respiratory illnesses like asthma
Revised:  Emissions of nitrogen oxide contribute to and are thought to have caused a rise in es like asthma
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Original:  Emissions of nitrogen oxide contribute to and are thought to have caused a rise in es like asthma
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Original:  Emissions of nitrogen oxide contribute to and are thought to have caused a rise in like asthma
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Original: of issued on Sunday a public apology and announced an outside inquiry would be carried out, after the company became engulfed in a scandal about diesel emissions tests. logo Over the weekend there were damaging revelations that the car manufacturer has been using illegal software to enable diesel cars to cheat on mandatory emissions tests.
Revised:  logo Over the weekend there were damaging revelations that the car manufacturer has been using illegal software to enable diesel cars to cheat on mandatory emissions tests.
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Original:  Emissions of nitrogen oxide contribute to and are thought to have caused a rise in like    
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Original:  On Sunday 20 September, of issued a public apology and announced that an external inquiry would be carried out, after the company became engulfed in a scandal about diesel emissions tests.
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Original:  There have been knock-on effects for other European car manufacturers who have also seen their share values fall after suggestions that the scandal could extend much further than just Volkswagen.
Revised:  There have been knock-on effects for other car manufacturers who have also seen their share values fall after suggestions that the scandal could extend much further than just Volkswagen.
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Original:  German state secretary in charge of pollution enforcement, Jochen Flasbarth, opined: “We are facing a blatant abuse of consumer trust and a degradation of the environment,” . On 22 September 2015, Volkswagen's share value continued their downward slide as authorities in South Korea announced investigations into Volkswagen.
Revised:  German state secretary in charge of pollution enforcement, Jochen Flasbarth, opined: “We are facing a blatant abuse of consumer trust and a degradation of the environment,” . 
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Original:  Emissions of nitrogen oxide contribute to and are thought to have caused a rise in like .
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Original:  National consumer-rights law firm, Keller Rohrback, also filed a class-action lawsuit against Volkswagen’s U.S. manufacturer and distributor
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Original:  Emissions of nitrogen oxide contribute to and are thought to have caused a rise in like  
Revised:  Emissions of nitrogen oxide contribute to and are thought to have caused a rise in like . 
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Original:  The medal recipients "reveal the best of who were are and who we inspire to be," said Obama  
Revised:  The medal recipients "reveal the best of who were are and who we inspire to be," said Obama . 
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Original:  environmental advocate  Maya Angelou,
Revised:  environmental advocate ; Maya Angelou,
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Original:  poet and author  Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist  Jasper Johns, contemporary artist  Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor  Yo-Yo Ma, cellist  Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist  Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player  Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player  Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate  John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
Revised:  poet and author ; Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist Jasper Johns, contemporary artist Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor Yo-Yo Ma, cellist Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
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Original:  poet and author  Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist  Jasper Johns, contemporary artist  Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor  Yo-Yo Ma, cellist  Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist  Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player  Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player  Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate  John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
Revised:  poet and author Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist ; Jasper Johns, contemporary artist Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor Yo-Yo Ma, cellist Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
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Original:  poet and author  Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist  Jasper Johns, contemporary artist  Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor  Yo-Yo Ma, cellist  Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist  Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player  Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player  Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate  John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
Revised:  poet and author Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist Jasper Johns, contemporary artist ; Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor Yo-Yo Ma, cellist Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
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Original:  poet and author  Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist  Jasper Johns, contemporary artist  Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor  Yo-Yo Ma, cellist  Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist  Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player  Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player  Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate  John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
Revised:  poet and author Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist Jasper Johns, contemporary artist Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor ; Yo-Yo Ma, cellist Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
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Original:  poet and author  Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist  Jasper Johns, contemporary artist  Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor  Yo-Yo Ma, cellist  Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist  Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player  Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player  Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate  John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
Revised:  poet and author Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist Jasper Johns, contemporary artist Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor Yo-Yo Ma, cellist ; Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
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Original:  poet and author  Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist  Jasper Johns, contemporary artist  Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor  Yo-Yo Ma, cellist  Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist  Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player  Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player  Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate  John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
Revised:  poet and author Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist Jasper Johns, contemporary artist Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor Yo-Yo Ma, cellist Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist ; Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
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Original:  poet and author  Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist  Jasper Johns, contemporary artist  Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor  Yo-Yo Ma, cellist  Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist  Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player  Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player  Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate  John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
Revised:  poet and author Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist Jasper Johns, contemporary artist Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor Yo-Yo Ma, cellist Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player ; Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
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Original:  poet and author  Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist  Jasper Johns, contemporary artist  Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor  Yo-Yo Ma, cellist  Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist  Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player  Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player  Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate  John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
Revised:  poet and author Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist Jasper Johns, contemporary artist Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor Yo-Yo Ma, cellist Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player ; Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
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Original:  poet and author  Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist  Jasper Johns, contemporary artist  Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor  Yo-Yo Ma, cellist  Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist  Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player  Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player  Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate  John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
Revised:  poet and author Warren Buffett, billionaire executive and philanthropist Jasper Johns, contemporary artist Gerda Weissmann Klein, Holocaust survivor Yo-Yo Ma, cellist Sylvia Mendez civil rights activist Stan Musial, retired St. Louis Cardinals baseball player Bill Russell, retired basketball coach and Boston Celtics player Jean Kennedy Smith, diplomat and disabilities advocate ; and John J. Sweeney, former president of the American Federation of Labor and Congress of Industrial Organization
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Original:  US President Barack Obama presented the Presidential Medal of Freedom to fifteen people Tuesday, including former US President George H. W. Bush and current Chancellor of Germany Angela Merkel.
Revised: The Presidential Medal of Freedom US President Barack Obama presented the Presidential Medal of Freedom to fifteen people Tuesday, including former US President George H. W. Bush and current Chancellor of Germany Angela Merkel.
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Original:  The award—the US'  top civilian medal—is given to those who have made "an especially meritorious contribution to the security or national interests of the United States, world peace, cultural or other significant public or private endeavors."
Revised:  The award—the US' s top civilian medal—is given to those who have made "an especially meritorious contribution to the security or national interests of the United States, world peace, cultural or other significant public or private endeavors."
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Original:  This follows the intercession of regional leaders and the regular , which sent soldiers to the capital on Monday.
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Original:  The President announced yesterday that the presidential guard unit involved in the coup, the , would be dissolved   .
Revised:  The President announced yesterday that the presidential guard unit involved in the coup, the , would be dissolved . .
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Original:  The leaders of the met on Tuesday in the Nigerian capital and flew to Burkina Faso to help with negotiations.
Revised:  The leaders of the met on Tuesday in the Nigerian capital and travelled to Burkina Faso to help with negotiations.
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Original:  This followed an official report which recommended that the presidential guards should be disbanded because they were an "".
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Original:  Diendéré was also involved in two previous coups in 1983 and 1987, the latter of which brought Compaoré to power
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Original:  Diendéré was also involved in two previous coups in 1983 and 1987, the latter of which brought Compaoré to power
Revised:  Diendéré was also involved in two previous coups in 1983 and 1987, the latter of which brought Compaoré 's chief of staff
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Original:  The government announced on Friday that the presidential guard unit involved in the coup, the , would be dissolved.
Revised:  By Friday the government announced that the presidential guard unit involved in the coup, the , would be dissolved.
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Original: The leaders of the met on Tuesday in the Nigerian capital and travelled to Burkina Faso to help with negotiations.
Revised: The leaders of the met on Tuesday in the Nigerian capital and helped with negotiations.
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Original: The President was released on Monday and Prime Minister on Tuesday, with both having been detained by the presidential guards at a ministerial meeting on September 16.
Revised: The President and Prime Minister on Tuesday, with both having been detained by the presidential guards at a ministerial meeting on September 16.
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Original: The President was released on Monday and Prime Minister on Tuesday, with both having been detained by the presidential guards at a ministerial meeting on September 16.
Revised: The President was released on Monday and Prime Minister were detained by the presidential guards at a ministerial meeting on September 16.
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Original:  Diendéré was previously Compaoré's chief of staff  
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Original:  "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces is keen to hand over power to politicians following the 6-month transitional phase ... then it will resume performing its main role of protecting the country of any external threats", said Atef El-Banna, a member of the current amending committee and professor of constitutional law at Cairo University  . "A new constitution requires a committee elected by the people to put it"  .
Revised:  "The Supreme Council of the Armed Forces is keen to hand over power to politicians following the 6-month transitional phase ... then it will resume performing its main role of protecting the country of any external threats", said Atef El-Banna, a member of the current amending committee and professor of constitutional law at Cairo University , an entirely new constitution would not be practical at this time . "A new constitution requires a committee elected by the people to put it" .
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