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Original:  A close-up of the "Snow Queen" feature under the lander.
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Original:  NASA has decided to name the various tasks and operations performed by Phoenix , after fairy tale and mythological characters.
Revised:  NASA has decided to name the various tasks and operations performed by Phoenix after fairy tale and mythological characters.
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Original:  Scientists, who named the exposed area Snow Queen, say that as Phoenix landed the exhaust from its thrusters cleared away a three to four inch layer of Martian soil which exposed a flat layer of a white substance that NASA says could be ice.
Revised:  Scientists, who named the exposed area Snow Queen, say that as Phoenix landed the exhaust from its thrusters cleared away a three- to four-inch layer of Martian soil which exposed a flat layer of a white substance that NASA says could be ice.
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Original:   "   What we see in the images is in agreement with the notion that it may be ice, and we suspect we will see the same thing in the digging area," stated Uwe Keller, Robotic Arm Camera lead scientist for Phoenix.
Revised:  " " What we see in the images is in agreement with the notion that it may be ice, and we suspect we will see the same thing in the digging area," stated Uwe Keller, Robotic Arm Camera lead scientist for Phoenix.
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Original:  Its mission is to determine Mars'  ability or inability to host life and hold water.
Revised:  Its mission is to determine Mars' s ability or inability to host life and hold water.
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Original: No major incidents were reported although one care was caught in a creek at the school, the driver having not seen the edge of the road due to the creek running rapidly over it.
Revised: No major incidents were reported although one care was caught in a creek at the school, the driver having not seen the edge of the road due to the creek running quicklynover it.
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Original: No major incidents were reported although one care was caught in a creek at the school, the driver having not seen the edge of the road due to the creek running quicklynover it.
Revised: No major incidents were reported although one care was caught in a creek at the school, the driver having not seen the edge of the road due to the creek running quickly over it.
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Original: No major incidents were reported although one care was caught in a creek at the school, the driver having not seen the edge of the road due to the creek running quickly over it.
Revised: No major incidents were reported although one car was caught in a creek at the school, the driver having not seen the edge of the road due to the creek running quickly over it.
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Original: Overnight rain off the back rain earlier in the week has caused the grounds at Sunshine Coast Grammar School to flood.
Revised: Overnight rain following rain earlier in the week has caused the grounds at Sunshine Coast Grammar School to flood.
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Original:  The school was closed and any students who showed up  sent home.
Revised:  The school has been closed and any students who showed up sent home.
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Original:  The school was closed and any students who showed up  sent home.
Revised:  The school was closed and any students who showed up were sent home.
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Original:  There is the possibility that senior classes would not go ahead tomorrow, as much of the lower floor of the resource center was flooded.
Revised:  There is the possibility that senior classes will not go ahead tomorrow, as much of the lower floor of the resource center was flooded.
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Original:  There is the possibility that senior classes would not go ahead tomorrow, as much of the lower floor of the resource center was flooded.
Revised:  There is the possibility that senior classes would not go ahead tomorrow, as much of the lower floor of the resource center has been flooded.
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Original:  The school was closed early and staff sent home , due to Workplace Health and Safety issues and accessability to  other parts of the Sunshine Coast.
Revised:  The school was closed early and staff sent home due to other parts of the Sunshine Coast.
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Original:  No major incidents were reported although one car was caught in a creek at the school, the driver having not seen the edge of the road due to the creek running quickly over it.
Revised:  No major incidents have been reported, although one car was caught in a creek at the school, the driver having not seen the edge of the road due to the creek running quickly over it.
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Original:  It was towed out safely  
Revised:  It was towed out safely . 
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Original: [[Image:South African Police-Memorial02.jpg|South African Police Service ]] Spokesperson for the police service  Captain Leonard Hlathi  said that the other three individuals have resigned from the police.
Revised: [[Image:South African Police-Memorial02.jpg|South African Police Service ]] A spokesperson for the police service Captain Leonard Hlathi said that the other three individuals have resigned from the police.
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Original: [[Image:South African Police-Memorial02.jpg|South African Police Service ]] Spokesperson for the police service  Captain Leonard Hlathi  said that the other three individuals have resigned from the police.
Revised: [[Image:South African Police-Memorial02.jpg|South African Police Service ]] Spokesperson for the police service , Captain Leonard Hlathi said that the other three individuals have resigned from the police.
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Original: [[Image:South African Police-Memorial02.jpg|South African Police Service ]] Spokesperson for the police service  Captain Leonard Hlathi  said that the other three individuals have resigned from the police.
Revised: [[Image:South African Police-Memorial02.jpg|South African Police Service ]] Spokesperson for the police service Captain Leonard Hlathi , said that the other three individuals have resigned from the police.
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Original:  "This was a syndicate that has cost the police service more than R2 ,5million and we believe we have made a breakthrough," said Hlathi.
Revised:  "This was a syndicate that has cost the police service more than R2 .5million and we believe we have made a breakthrough," said Hlathi.
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Original:  He said that three out of the five companies were found to not exist.
Revised:  He said that three out of the five companies were found not to exist.
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Original: Jose Mourinho is new Inter Milan coach José Mourinho has succeeded Roberto Mancini as new Inter Milan Head Coach after signing a 3-year contract with the club.
Revised: Jose Mourinho is new Inter Milan coach has succeeded as new Head Coach after signing a 3-year contract with the club.
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Original:  Mourinho won the 2002-03 UEFA Cup and 2003-04 UEFA Champions League with FC Porto but failed to repeat this success at Chelsea F.C
Revised:  Mourinho won the 2002-03 UEFA Cup and 2003-04 with but failed to repeat this success at Chelsea F.C
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Original:  Mourinho won the 2002-03 UEFA Cup and 2003-04 UEFA Champions League with FC Porto but failed to repeat this success at Chelsea F.C
Revised:  Mourinho won the 2002-03 UEFA Cup and 2003-04 UEFA Champions League with FC Porto but failed to repeat this success a
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Original:  401 allegedly abused children were taken into state custody last month after officials received a call from a distressed 16-year-old girl.
Revised: The 401 allegedly abused children were taken into state custody last month after officials received a call from a distressed 16-year-old girl.
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Original: ]]A Texas court has said that all children taken from the FDLS compound in Texas will be returned to their parents.
Revised: ]]A Texas court has announced that all children taken from the FDLS compound in Texas will be returned to their parents.
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Original: ]]A Texas court has said that all children taken from the FDLS compound in Texas will be returned to their parents.
Revised: ]]A Texas court has said that all children taken from the FDLS compound in Texas are being returned to their parents.
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Original:  Parents have been allowed , from today, to collect their children, all of whom were in state custody before the announcement.
Revised:  Beginning today, parents have been allowed , from today, to collect their children, all of whom were in state custody before the announcement.
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Original:  Parents have been allowed , from today, to collect their children, all of whom were in state custody before the announcement.
Revised:  Parents have been allowed to collect their children, all of whom were in state custody before the announcement.
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Original:  The 401 allegedly abused children were taken into state custody last month after officials  received a call from a distressed 16-year-old girl.
Revised:  The 401 allegedly abused children were taken into state custody last month after officials say they received a call from a distressed 16-year-old girl.
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Original:  The 401 allegedly abused children were taken into state custody last month after officials  received a call from a distressed 16-year-old girl.
Revised:  The 401 allegedly abused children were taken into state custody last month after officials received a call from a distressed 16-year old girl.
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Original:  The children were found in a 1700-acre compound belonging to the Fundamentalist Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints .
Revised:  The children were found in a 1700-acre compound belonging to the FLDS .
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Original: ]] The decision follows an appeals court-ruling that Texas Child Protective Services (CPS) should not have taken the children from the FLDS. Recently the Child Protection Service in Texas filed papers on this issue .
Revised: ]] The decision follows an appeals court ruling that Texas Child Protective Services (CPS) should not have taken the children from the FLDS. Recently the Child Protection Service in Texas filed papers on this issue .
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Original: ]] The decision follows an appeals court-ruling that Texas Child Protective Services (CPS) should not have taken the children from the FLDS. Recently the Child Protection Service in Texas filed papers on this issue .
Revised: ]] The decision follows an appeals court-ruling that Texas Child Protective Services (CPS) should not have taken the children from the FLDS. Recently the CPS in Texas filed papers on this issue .
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Original:  If they did that, they would suddenly be outside the court's jurisdiction, putting them at risk of abuse.
Revised:  If the families were to do that, they would suddenly be outside the court's jurisdiction, putting them at risk of abuse.
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Original:  If they did that, they would suddenly be outside the court's jurisdiction, putting them at risk of abuse.
Revised:  If they did that, they would then be outside the court's jurisdiction, putting them at risk of abuse.
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Original:  If they did that, they would suddenly be outside the court's jurisdiction, putting them at risk of abuse.
Revised:  If they did that, they would suddenly be outside the court's jurisdiction, putting the children at risk of abuse.
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Original:  The Child Protection Service in Texas released a statement regarding the court ruling . "We are disappointed, but we understand and respect the court's decision and will take immediate steps to comply.
Revised:  The CPS in Texas released a statement regarding the court ruling . "We are disappointed, but we understand and respect the court's decision and will take immediate steps to comply.
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Original:  The Child Protection Service in Texas released a statement regarding the court ruling . "We are disappointed, but we understand and respect the court's decision and will take immediate steps to comply.
Revised:  The Child Protection Service in Texas released a statement regarding the court ruling : "We are disappointed, but we understand and respect the court's decision and will take immediate steps to comply.
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Original:  Just prior to the murders, the family's babysitter, Katie Blewaska, had received a call stating that her husband was "finally on the mend"  
Revised:  Just prior to the murders, the family's babysitter, Katie Blewaska, had received a call stating that her husband was "finally on the mend" . 
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Original:  He was just a solid, come-to-work and get-it-done kind of guy.  
Revised:  He was just a solid, come-to-work and get-it-done kind of guy. " 
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Original: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27. 34-year-old Joshua Lall stabbed and killed his 35-year-old wife, Alison, his two daughters, Kristen, 5  and Rochelle, 3, and 30-year-old Amber Bowerman, a tenant in their home, before committing suicide.
Revised: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27. Joshua Lall, 34, stabbed and killed his 35-year-old wife, Alison, his two daughters, Kristen, 5 and Rochelle, 3, and 30-year-old Amber Bowerman, a tenant in their home, before committing suicide.
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Original: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27. 34-year-old Joshua Lall stabbed and killed his 35-year-old wife, Alison, his two daughters, Kristen, 5  and Rochelle, 3, and 30-year-old Amber Bowerman, a tenant in their home, before committing suicide.
Revised: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27. 34-year-old Joshua Lall stabbed and killed his 35-year old wife, Alison, his two daughters, Kristen, 5 and Rochelle, 3, and 30-year-old Amber Bowerman, a tenant in their home, before committing suicide.
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Original: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27. 34-year-old Joshua Lall stabbed and killed his 35-year-old wife, Alison, his two daughters, Kristen, 5  and Rochelle, 3, and 30-year-old Amber Bowerman, a tenant in their home, before committing suicide.
Revised: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27. 34-year-old Joshua Lall stabbed and killed his 35-year-old wife, Alison, his two daughters, Kristen, 5 , and Rochelle, 3, and 30-year-old Amber Bowerman, a tenant in their home, before committing suicide.
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Original: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27. 34-year-old Joshua Lall stabbed and killed his 35-year-old wife, Alison, his two daughters, Kristen, 5  and Rochelle, 3, and 30-year-old Amber Bowerman, a tenant in their home, before committing suicide.
Revised: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27. 34-year-old Joshua Lall stabbed and killed his 35-year-old wife, Alison, his two daughters, Kristen, 5 and Rochelle, 3, and 30-year old Amber Bowerman, a tenant in their home, before committing suicide.
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Original:  A third daughter, one-year-old Anna, was not harmed.
Revised:  A third daughter, one-year old Anna, was not harmed.
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Original:  Joshua apparently harboured a mental illness , which is thought by police investigators to be the driving force behind the murders.
Revised:  Joshua apparently harboured a mental illness which is thought by police investigators to be the driving force behind the murders.
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Original:  Joshua apparently harboured a mental illness , which is thought by police investigators to be the driving force behind the murders.
Revised:  Joshua apparently harboured a mental illness , which is thought by police investigators to have been the driving force behind the murders.
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Original:  A few days before this event, Joshua had called his father, Dominic Lall, telling him of a "mental breakdown" he was having.
Revised:  A few days before the event, Joshua had called his father, Dominic Lall, telling him of a "mental breakdown" he was having.
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Original:  A few days before this event, Joshua had called his father, Dominic Lall, telling him of a "mental breakdown" he was having.
Revised:  A few days before this event, Joshua had called his father, Dominic Lall, telling of a "mental breakdown" he was having.
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Original:  Just prior to the murders, the family's babysitter , Katie Blewaska , had received a call stating that her husband was "finally on the mend".
Revised:  Just prior to the murders, the family's babysitter Katie Blewaska had received a call stating that her husband was "finally on the mend".
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Original:  Just prior to the murders, the family's babysitter , Katie Blewaska , had received a call stating that her husband was "finally on the mend".
Revised:  Just prior to the murders, the family's babysitter , Katie Blewaska , had received a call from Joshua's wife stating that Joshua was "finally on the mend".
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Original:  Rob Adamson, chairman of the firm, said of Joshua  " t here were no indicators to us at work of any problems.
Revised:  Rob Adamson, chairman of the firm, said of Joshua that " t here were no indicators to us at work of any problems.
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Original:  Rob Adamson, chairman of the firm, said of Joshua  " t here were no indicators to us at work of any problems.
Revised:  Rob Adamson, chairman of the firm, said of Joshua " here were no indicators to us at work of any problems.
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Original:  Rob Adamson, chairman of the firm, said of Joshua  " t here were no indicators to us at work of any problems.
Revised:  Rob Adamson, chairman of the firm, said of Joshua " t there were no indicators to us at work of any problems.
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Original:  She had been attending a conference in Lake Louise , in the Rocky Mountains , and had been invited to stay an extra day.
Revised:  She had been attending a conference in Lake Louise in the Rocky Mountains , and had been invited to stay an extra day.
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Original:  She had been attending a conference in Lake Louise , in the Rocky Mountains , and had been invited to stay an extra day.
Revised:  She had been attending a conference in Lake Louise , in the Rocky Mountains and had been invited to stay an extra day.
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Original: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27.
Revised: Five people have been confirmed dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27.
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Original: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide in Calgary, Canada, which occurred on Tuesday, May 27.
Revised: Five people are dead in a murder-suicide that occurred on Tuesday, May 27.
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Original:  Mr. Kennedy, 76, has been diagnosed with malignant glioma, a common but dangerous form of cancer.
Revised:  Kennedy, 76, has been diagnosed with malignant glioma, a common but dangerous form of cancer.
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Original:  Before the press, the senator is focusing on his future beyond surgery : in a prepared statement issued by his office Kennedy stated "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president.
Revised:  In talks with the press, the senator is focusing on his future beyond surgery : in a prepared statement issued by his office Kennedy stated "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president.
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Original:  Before the press, the senator is focusing on his future beyond surgery : in a prepared statement issued by his office Kennedy stated "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president.
Revised:  Before the press, the senator has focused on his future beyond surgery : in a prepared statement issued by his office Kennedy stated "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president.
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Original:  Before the press, the senator is focusing on his future beyond surgery : in a prepared statement issued by his office Kennedy stated "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president.
Revised:  Before the press, the senator is focusing on his future beyond surgery . In a prepared statement issued by his office Kennedy stated "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president.
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Original:  Before the press, the senator is focusing on his future beyond surgery : in a prepared statement issued by his office Kennedy stated "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president.
Revised:  Before the press, the senator is focusing on his future beyond surgery : in a prepared statement issued by his office , Kennedy stated, "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president.
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Original: right  Senator Edward Kennedy is currently undergoing surgery for a brain tumor at Duke University medical center . Kennedy, 76, has been diagnosed with malignant glioma, a common but dangerous form of cancer .
Revised: right Senator Edward Kennedy underwent surgery for a brain tumor at Duke University medical center . Kennedy, 76, has been diagnosed with malignant glioma, a common but dangerous form of cancer .
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Original: right  Senator Edward Kennedy is currently undergoing surgery for a brain tumor at Duke University medical center . Kennedy, 76, has been diagnosed with malignant glioma, a common but dangerous form of cancer .
Revised: right Senator Edward Kennedy is currently undergoing surgery for a brain tumor at Duke University Medical Center . Kennedy, 76, has been diagnosed with malignant glioma, a common but dangerous form of cancer .
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Original: right  Senator Edward Kennedy is currently undergoing surgery for a brain tumor at Duke University medical center . Kennedy, 76, has been diagnosed with malignant glioma, a common but dangerous form of cancer .
Revised: right Senator Edward Kennedy is currently undergoing surgery for a brain tumor at Duke University medical center . Kennedy, 76, was diagnosed with malignant glioma, a common but dangerous form of cancer .
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Original:  Now, one of the major phases of that treatment has begun  .
Revised:  The first, of the major phases of that treatment has begun .
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Original:  In a prepared statement issued by his office, Kennedy stated, "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president.  
Revised:  In a prepared statement issued by his office, Kennedy stated, "after completing treatment, I look forward to returning to the United States Senate and to doing everything I can to help elect Barack Obama as our next president. " 
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