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Original:  This new search engine was made supposedly to help compete with other search engines, including Yahoo!, as well as other blog search engines  . Google Blogsearch has joined the group of  Google search engines, including Google Image search, Google Groups, and the famous Google Web search
Revised:  This new search engine was made supposedly to help compete with other search engines, including Yahoo!, and other blog search engines . Google Blogsearch has joined the group of Google search engines, including Google Image search, Google Groups, and the famous Google Web search
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Original:  This new search engine was made supposedly to help compete with other search engines, including Yahoo!, as well as other blog search engines  . Google Blogsearch has joined the group of  Google search engines, including Google Image search, Google Groups, and the famous Google Web search
Revised:  This new search engine was made supposedly to help compete with other search engines, including Yahoo!, as well as other blog search engines . Google Blogsearch has joined the group of other Google search engines, including Google Image search, Google Groups, and the famous Google Web search
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Original:  Plot The movie is set in China in 859AD , during the Tang Dynasty.
Revised:  Plot The movie is set in China in 859 AD , during the Tang Dynasty.
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Original:  They are the first to be held in the country since last year's presidential elections.
Revised:  They are the first elections held in the country since last year's presidential elections.
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Original:  There was a high percentage of voter participation, and  according to Bimillah Bismal, head of the Afghan-UN Joint Electoral Management Body, "The election was held in a peaceful manner…
Revised:  There was high voter participation, and according to Bimillah Bismal, head of the Afghan-UN Joint Electoral Management Body, "The election was held in a peaceful manner…
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Original:  There was a high percentage of voter participation, and  according to Bimillah Bismal, head of the Afghan-UN Joint Electoral Management Body, "The election was held in a peaceful manner…
Revised:  There was a high percentage of voter participation, and , according to Bimillah Bismal, head of the Afghan-UN Joint Electoral Management Body, "The election was held in a peaceful manner…
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Original:  There are approximately 5,800 candidates, competing for 420 spots in the provincial court, and 249 deputy positions in the wing of the Afghani Parliament Wolesi Jirga .
Revised:  There are approximately 5,800 candidates, competing for 420 slots in the provincial court, and 249 deputy positions in the wing of the Afghani Parliament Wolesi Jirga .
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Original:  There are approximately 5,800 candidates, competing for 420 spots in the provincial court, and 249 deputy positions in the wing of the Afghani Parliament Wolesi Jirga .
Revised:  There are approximately 5,800 candidates, competing for 420 spots in the provincial court, and 249 deputy positions in the wing of the Afghani Parliament (Wolesi Jirga) .
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Original:  Violence does sprout up occasionally, with four election officials killed in the past year, as well as seven contenders for deputy positions.
Revised:  Violence did sprout up occasionally, with four election officials killed in the past year, as well as seven contenders for deputy positions.
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Original:  However, the U.S.-led coalition is working to minimize these problems  , and so far, Taliban militant actions have not been an overwhelming issue.
Revised:  However, the US-led coalition is working to minimize these problems , and so far, Taliban militant actions have not been an overwhelming issue.
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Original:   A 2018 lunar mission is proposed, where a crew of four would remain on the Moon for as long as a week.
Revised:  (NASA) A 2018 lunar mission is proposed, where a crew of four would remain on the Moon for as long as a week.
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Original:  The use of a Launch Escape System (LES) will improve safely .
Revised:  The use of a Launch Escape System (LES) will improve safety .
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Original:  The country is agreeing to return to the Nuclear Nonproliferation Treaty and follow International Atomic Energy Agency safeguards.
Revised:  The country agreed to again return to the Nuclear Nonproliferation Treaty and follow International Atomic Energy Agency safeguards.
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Original:  The other countries agreed to give North Korea energy assistance and at a apporiate time , a light-water reactor
Revised:  Other countries have agreed to give North Korea energy assistance and at a apporiate time , a light-water reactor
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Original:  The other countries agreed to give North Korea energy assistance and at a apporiate time , a light-water reactor
Revised:  The other countries agreed to give North Korea energy assistance and also at an appropriate time a light-water reactor
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Original:  Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somali , was apprehended as tried to activate the bomb using a mobile phone.
Revised:  Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somalia , was apprehended as tried to activate the bomb using a mobile phone.
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Original:  Dwight Holton, a U.S. attorney, described Mohamud's "chilling determination" as a "stark reminder that there are people—even here in Oregon—who are determined to kill Americans." [[File:USACE Fremont Bridge Portland.jpg|Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somali , was apprehended as he attempted to detonate a car bomb at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland.
Revised:  Dwight Holton, a U.S. attorney, described Mohamud's "chilling determination" as a "stark reminder that there are people—even here in Oregon—who are determined to kill Americans." [[File:USACE Fremont Bridge Portland.jpg|Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somalia , was apprehended as he attempted to detonate a car bomb at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland.
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Original: A 19-year-old Oregon  resident has been charged with attempting to use a weapon of mass destruction after a sting operation , in which he attempted to detonate a car bomb at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland.
Revised: A 19-year-old Oregon resident has been charged with attempting to use a weapon of mass destruction after a sting operation ; authorities say
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Original:  Reports have emerged stating that Mohamud, a United States citizen, had been in regular contact with an individual based in north-west Pakistan.
Revised:  Reports say Mohamud, a United States citizen, had been in regular contact with an individual based in north-west Pakistan.
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Original:  Reports have emerged stating that Mohamud, a United States citizen, had been in regular contact with an individual based in north-west Pakistan.
Revised:  Reports have emerged stating that Mohamud, a US citizen, had been in regular contact with an individual based in north-west Pakistan.
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Original:  Reports have emerged stating that Mohamud, a United States citizen, had been in regular contact with an individual based in north-west Pakistan.
Revised:  Reports have emerged stating that Mohamud, a United States citizen, had been in regular contact with somebody in north-west Pakistan.
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Original:  Authorites intercepted e-mails between Mohamud and his contact in Pakistan in August 2009.
Revised:  Authorites intercepted e-mails between Mohamud and this contact in August 2009.
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Original:   An FBI agent told reporters : " The  threat was very real.
Revised:  An FBI agent told reporters " The threat was very real.
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Original:   An FBI agent told reporters : " The  threat was very real.
Revised:  An FBI agent told reporters : " t threat was very real.
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Original:   An FBI agent told reporters : " The  threat was very real.
Revised:  An FBI agent told reporters : " The he threat was very real.
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Original:  Court papers indicated that an undercover agent told Mohamud that he was an associate of the contact in Pakistan .
Revised:  Court papers indicated that an undercover agent told Mohamud that he was an associate the Pakistani contact .
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Original:  Mohamud told the agent that he had wanted to carry out a jihad (holy war) against the U.S. since he was fifteen years of age
Revised:  Mohamud told the agent that he had wanted to carry out a jihad (holy war) against the U.S. since he was fifteen years old
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Original:  authorities say Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somalia, tried to detonate a car bomb using a mobile phone at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland.
Revised:  authorities say Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somalia, tried to detonate a van bomb using a mobile phone at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland.
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Original:  [[File:USACE Fremont Bridge Portland.jpg| Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somalia, was apprehended as he attempted to detonate a car bomb at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland .]] The device, police stated, was fake;
Revised:  [[File:USACE Fremont Bridge Portland.jpg| Portland was the scene of an alleged bombing attempt .]] The device, police stated, was fake;
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Original:  he reportedly purchased it from undercover agents during a sting operation.
Revised:  he reportedly obtained it from undercover agents during a sting operation.
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Original:  One e-mail intercepted by agents reads "I want whoever is attending that event to leave, to leave either dead or injured."
Revised:  Mohamud allegededly told an FBI agent "I want whoever is attending that event to leave, to leave either dead or injured."
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Original:  Dwight Holton, a U.S. attorney, described Mohamud's "chilling determination" as a "stark reminder that there are people—even here in Oregon—who are determined to kill Americans." Court papers indicated that an undercover agent told Mohamud that he was an associate  the Pakistani contact.
Revised:  Dwight Holton, a U.S. attorney, described Mohamud's "chilling determination" as a "stark reminder that there are people—even here in Oregon—who are determined to kill Americans." Court papers indicated that an undercover agent told Mohamud that he was an associate of the Pakistani contact.
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Original:  authorities say  Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somalia, tried to detonate a van bomb using a mobile phone at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland.
Revised:  authorities say w: Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somalia, tried to detonate a van bomb using a mobile phone at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland.
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Original:  authorities say w: Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somalia, tried to detonate a van bomb using a mobile phone at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland.
Revised:  authorities say Mohamed Osman Mohamud, born in Somalia, tried to detonate a van bomb using a mobile phone at a Christmas tree lighting ceremony in Portland.
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Original: A 19-year-old Oregon, US resident has been charged with attempting to use a weapon of mass destruction after a sting operation;
Revised: A 19-year-old Oregon, U.S. resident has been charged with attempting to use a weapon of mass destruction after a sting operation;
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Original:  The aircraft were grounded three weeks ago after one of the aircraft's engines became badly damaged during flight over Indonesia .
Revised:  The aircraft were grounded three weeks ago after one of the aircraft's engines became badly damaged during flight .
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Original: Australian airline Qantas has begun flying the first of its fleet of Airbus A380s  , after all six of the "superjumbo" aircraft were grounded earlier this month .
Revised: Australian airline Qantas has returned the first of its fleet of Airbus A380s , after all six of the "superjumbo" aircraft were grounded earlier this month .
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Original:  A spokesperson confirmed that tests had been performed "in close consultation with Rolls-Royce and Airbus" on the  Trent 900 engines on the aircraft . Qantas has replaced at least 14 of the engineson their aircraft , and modifications have been made to other Trent 900 engines, which are used by two other companies, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines.
Revised:  A spokesperson confirmed that tests had been performed "in close consultation with Rolls-Royce and Airbus" on the model's Trent 900 engines on the aircraft . Qantas has replaced at least 14 of the engineson their aircraft , and modifications have been made to other Trent 900 engines, which are used by two other companies, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines.
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Original:  A spokesperson confirmed that tests had been performed "in close consultation with Rolls-Royce and Airbus" on the  Trent 900 engines on the aircraft . Qantas has replaced at least 14 of the engineson their aircraft , and modifications have been made to other Trent 900 engines, which are used by two other companies, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines.
Revised:  A spokesperson confirmed that tests had been performed "in close consultation with Rolls-Royce and Airbus" on the Trent 900 engines . Qantas has replaced at least 14 of the engineson their aircraft , and modifications have been made to other Trent 900 engines, which are used by two other companies, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines.
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Original:  A spokesperson confirmed that tests had been performed "in close consultation with Rolls-Royce and Airbus" on the  Trent 900 engines on the aircraft . Qantas has replaced at least 14 of the engineson their aircraft , and modifications have been made to other Trent 900 engines, which are used by two other companies, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines.
Revised:  A spokesperson confirmed that tests had been performed "in close consultation with Rolls-Royce and Airbus" on the Trent 900 engines on the aircraft . Qantas has replaced at least 14 engines , and modifications have been made to other Trent 900 engines, which are used by two other companies, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines.
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Original:  A spokesperson confirmed that tests had been performed "in close consultation with Rolls-Royce and Airbus" on the  Trent 900 engines on the aircraft . Qantas has replaced at least 14 of the engineson their aircraft , and modifications have been made to other Trent 900 engines, which are used by two other companies, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines.
Revised:  A spokesperson confirmed that tests had been performed "in close consultation with Rolls-Royce and Airbus" on the Trent 900 engines on the aircraft . Qantas has replaced at least 14 of the engineson their aircraft , and modifications have been made to Trent 900s used by two other companies, Lufthansa and Singapore Airlines.
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Original:  the airline's shares have dropped by 7\% since the incident .
Revised:  the airline's shares have dropped by 7\% since .
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Original:  There are reportedly plans to build a cargo version of the plane, which, aviation expers have suggested, would be the world's first "triple-decker" freight aircraft;
Revised:  There are reportedly plans to build a cargo version of the plane, which, aviation experts have suggested, would be the world's first "triple-decker" freight aircraft;
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Original:  Airbus has not confirmed that this aircraft will be built
Revised:  Airbus has not confirmed that this varient will be built
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Original:  The A380, or "superjumbo", is the largest commerical passenger airliner in the world , being able to carry up to 840 passengers . ]] Experts said that the incident was embarrasing for Airbus;
Revised:  The A380, or "superjumbo", is the largest commerical passenger airliner in the world . ]] Experts said that the incident was embarrasing for Airbus;
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Original: File:Qantas A380 1.jpg| The Airbus A380  involved in the incident earlier this month.
Revised: File:Qantas A380 1.jpg| An Airbus A380 involved in the incident earlier this month.
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Original: Mansour al-Turki of the interier ministry identified three wholly independant netwroks - all unaware of each other - and multiple smaller cells.
Revised: Mansour al-Turki of the interior ministry identified three wholly independant netwroks - all unaware of each other - and multiple smaller cells.
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Original: Mansour al-Turki of the interier ministry identified three wholly independant netwroks - all unaware of each other - and multiple smaller cells.
Revised: Mansour al-Turki of the interier ministry identified three wholly independent networks - all unaware of each other - and multiple smaller cells.
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Original:  The anouncement follows a similar one in March in which 113 were arrested (51 were local) over alleged attack plots against oil and security targets.
Revised:  The announcement follows a similar one in March in which 113 were arrested (51 were local) over alleged attack plots against oil and security targets.
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Original:  The anouncement follows a similar one in March in which 113 were arrested (51 were local) over alleged attack plots against oil and security targets.
Revised:  The anouncement follows a similar one in March in which 113 were arrested over alleged attack plots against oil and security targets.
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Original: Of the 149, 124 are locals and 25 were foreigners.
Revised: Of the 149, 124 are locals and twenty-five were foreigners.
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Original:  These circumstances have led to calls for legislative changes, according to The Scotsman, which compared the death to the recent Baby P case in neighbouring England    ]   
Revised:  These circumstances have led to calls for legislative changes, according to The Scotsman, which compared the death to the recent Baby P case in neighbouring England . ] 
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Original:  These circumstances have led to calls for legislative changes, according to The Scotsman, which compared the death to the recent Baby P case in neighbouring England    ]   
Revised:  These circumstances have led to calls for legislative changes, according to The Scotsman, which compared the death to the recent Baby P case in neighbouring England w] 
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Original: Lord Uist was "very concerned " that "nothing was done" following Dr Mackay's assessment.
Revised: Lord Uist was "very disturbed " that "nothing was done" following Dr Mackay's assessment.
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Original: Sheach had initially been unable to get an apointment at Aberdeen-based Woodside for her daughter;
Revised: Sheach had initially been unable to get an appointment at Aberdeen-based Woodside for her daughter;
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Original:  a consultant neurolsurgeon testified at trial that this did not explain the subconjunctival haemorrhages in the eyes.
Revised:  a consultant neurosurgeon testified at trial that this did not explain the subconjunctival haemorrhages in the eyes.
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Original:  Lord Uist made the comments during the sentencing of Mark Simpson, who was yesterday convicted of murdering the six-week-old girl.
Revised:  Lord Uist made the comments while sentencing Mark Simpson, who was yesterday convicted of murdering the six-week-old girl.
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Original:  These circumstances have led to calls for legislative changes, according to The Scotsman, which compared the death to the recent Baby P case in neighbouring England.  ]
Revised:  These circumstances have led to calls for legislative changes, according to The Scotsman, which compared the death to the recent Baby P case in neighbouring England. t]
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Original:  Lord Uist also made this comparison, saying "Scottish health authorities have to treat this case with a similar degree of importance and urgency , " to "[t]he Baby P case down south . " 
Revised:  Lord Uist also made this comparison, saying "Scottish health authorities have to treat this case with a similar degree of importance and urgency " to "[t]he Baby P case down south . " 
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Original:  Lord Uist also made this comparison, saying "Scottish health authorities have to treat this case with a similar degree of importance and urgency , " to "[t]he Baby P case down south . " 
Revised:  Lord Uist also made this comparison, saying "Scottish health authorities have to treat this case with a similar degree of importance and urgency , " to "[t]he Baby P case down south " 
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Original:  Lord Uist also made this comparison, saying "Scottish health authorities have to treat this case with a similar degree of importance and urgency , " to "[t]he Baby P case down south . " 
Revised:  Lord Uist also made this comparison, saying "Scottish health authorities have to treat this case with a similar degree of importance and urgency , " to "[t]he Baby P case down south . " .
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Original: File:People camping in La Cruz Hill.jpg|"It catched my mather in Pichilemu.
Revised: File:People camping in La Cruz Hill.jpg|"It catched my mother in Pichilemu.
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Original:  Four strong aftershocks have occurred on today's early morning in Chile at night local time .
Revised:  Four strong aftershocks have occurred on today's early morning in Chile .
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Original:  Earlier this year, Wikileaks released 70,000 documents detailing military actions in Afghanistan  
Revised:  Earlier this year, Wikileaks released 70,000 documents detailing military actions in Afghanistan . 
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Original:  In a letter to Julian Assange, founder of the whistle-blowers website, the Obama administration said that releasing the documents, rumoured to be seven times the size of the Iraq War Logs, would be in breach of U.S. law, and would result in "grave consequences."
Revised:  In a letter to Julian Assange, founder of the whistle-blowing website, the Obama administration said that releasing the documents, rumoured to be seven times the size of the Iraq War Logs, would be in breach of U.S. law, and would result in "grave consequences."
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Original:  It is thought that the files will include correspondance between U.S. diplomats around the world.
Revised:  It is thought that the files will include correspondence between U.S. diplomats around the world.
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Original:  Anylists have said that the letter reflects the U.S. administration's concern over possible publication of the files, which may contain American diplomats' opinions of other politicians, some of which may be candid and embarrasing .
Revised:  Anylists have said that the letter reflects the U.S. administration's concern over possible publication of the files, which may contain American diplomats' opinions of other politicians, some of which may be candid and embarrassing .
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Original: Over 800 NHS staff in Scotland are earning more than £140,000 each year , more than the annual salary of Alex Salmond, First Minister of Scotland .
Revised: Over 800 National Health Service staff in Scotland are earning more than £140,000 each year , more than the annual salary of Alex Salmond, First Minister of Scotland .
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Original: Over 800 NHS staff in Scotland are earning more than £140,000 each year , more than the annual salary of Alex Salmond, First Minister of Scotland .
Revised: Over 800 NHS staff in Scotland are earning more than £140,000 each year - more than First Minister Alex Salmond .
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Original:  New figures also reveal that 3000 NHS workers are earning over £100,000.
Revised:  New figures also reveal that 3,000 NHS workers are earning over £100,000.
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