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Original:  It is awarded annually to the best candidate who gains First Class Honours in Mental Philosophy .
Revised:  It is awarded annually to the best candidate who gains First Class Honours in Mental philosophy .
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Original: In nephrology, renal segmental hypoplasia, also Ask-Upmark kidney, is a kidney with a partially developed or atrophic renal cortex.
Revised: Renal segmental hypoplasia, also Ask-Upmark kidney, is a kidney with a partially developed or atrophic renal cortex.
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Original:  Etiology It is thought to be congenital or the consequence of vesicoureteral reflux.
Revised:  Cause It is thought to be congenital or the consequence of vesicoureteral reflux.
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Original: Significance Ask-Upmark kidneys are a cause of secondary hypertension that can be curable.
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Original: Renal segmental hypoplasia , also Ask-Upmark kidney, is a kidney with a partially developed or atrophic renal cortex.
Revised: Renal segmental hypoplasia is a kidney with a partially developed or atrophic renal cortex.
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Original:  In addition, there are sulfate-reducing microorganisms that can also reduce other electron acceptors, such as fumarate, nitrate (NO3−), nitrite (NO2−), ferric iron [Fe(III)], and dimethyl sulfoxide  .
Revised:  In addition, there are sulfate-reducing microorganisms that can also reduce other electron acceptors, such as fumarate, nitrate (NO3−), nitrite (NO2−), ferric iron [Fe(III)], and dimethyl sulfoxide (DMSO) .
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Original:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
Revised:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
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Original:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
Revised:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
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Original:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
Revised:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
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Original:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
Revised:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
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Original:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
Revised:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
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Original:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( Sn2− ).
Revised:  Most sulfate-reducing microorganisms can also reduce some other oxidized inorganic sulfur compounds, such as sulfite ( SO32– ), dithionite ( S2O42– ), thiosulfate ( S2O32– ), trithionate ( S3O62– ), tetrathionate ( S4O62− ), elemental sulfur (S8), and polysulfides ( ).
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Original:  In addition, there are sulfate-reducing microorganisms that can also reduce other electron acceptors, such as fumarate, nitrate ( NO3− ), nitrite ( NO2− ), ferric iron Fe(III) , and dimethyl sulfoxide (DMSO).
Revised:  In addition, there are sulfate-reducing microorganisms that can also reduce other electron acceptors, such as fumarate, nitrate ( NO3− ), nitrite ( ), ferric iron Fe(III) , and dimethyl sulfoxide (DMSO).
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Original:  The organotrophs oxidize organic compounds, such as carbohydrates, organic acids ( e.g., formate, lactate, acetate, propionate, and butyrate), alcohols (methanol and ethanol), aliphatic hydrocarbons (including methane), and aromatic hydrocarbons (benzene, toluene, ethylbenzene, and xylene).
Revised:  The organotrophs oxidize organic compounds, such as carbohydrates, organic acids ( such as formate, lactate, acetate, propionate, and butyrate), alcohols (methanol and ethanol), aliphatic hydrocarbons (including methane), and aromatic hydrocarbons (benzene, toluene, ethylbenzene, and xylene).
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Original:  Some sulfate-reducing microorganisms can directly use metallic iron Fe(0) (  zerovalent iron, or ZVI) as electron donor, oxidizing it to ferrous iron Fe(II) . CH4 + SO42− → HCO3− + HS− + H2O Before sulfate can be used as an electron acceptor, it must be activated.
Revised:  Some sulfate-reducing microorganisms can directly use metallic iron ( zerovalent iron, or ZVI) as electron donor, oxidizing it to ferrous iron Fe(II) . CH4 + SO42− → HCO3− + HS− + H2O Before sulfate can be used as an electron acceptor, it must be activated.
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Original:  Some sulfate-reducing microorganisms can directly use metallic iron Fe(0) (  zerovalent iron, or ZVI) as electron donor, oxidizing it to ferrous iron Fe(II) . CH4 + SO42− → HCO3− + HS− + H2O Before sulfate can be used as an electron acceptor, it must be activated.
Revised:  Some sulfate-reducing microorganisms can directly use metallic iron Fe(0) ( Fe0, also known as zerovalent iron, or ZVI) as electron donor, oxidizing it to ferrous iron Fe(II) . CH4 + SO42− → HCO3− + HS− + H2O Before sulfate can be used as an electron acceptor, it must be activated.
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Original:  Some sulfate-reducing microorganisms can directly use metallic iron Fe(0) (  zerovalent iron, or ZVI) as electron donor, oxidizing it to ferrous iron Fe(II) . CH4 + SO42− → HCO3− + HS− + H2O Before sulfate can be used as an electron acceptor, it must be activated.
Revised:  Some sulfate-reducing microorganisms can directly use metallic iron Fe(0) ( zerovalent iron, or ZVI) as electron donor, oxidizing it to ferrous iron Fe(II) . CH4 + → HCO3− + HS− + H2O Before sulfate can be used as an electron acceptor, it must be activated.
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Original:  Some sulfate-reducing microorganisms can directly use metallic iron Fe(0) (  zerovalent iron, or ZVI) as electron donor, oxidizing it to ferrous iron Fe(II) . CH4 + SO42− → HCO3− + HS− + H2O Before sulfate can be used as an electron acceptor, it must be activated.
Revised:  Some sulfate-reducing microorganisms can directly use metallic iron Fe(0) ( zerovalent iron, or ZVI) as electron donor, oxidizing it to ferrous iron Fe(II) . CH4 + SO42− → + HS− + H2O Before sulfate can be used as an electron acceptor, it must be activated.
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Original:  This is done by the enzyme ATP-sulfurylase, which uses ATP and sulfate to create adenosine 5 ' -phosphosulfate (APS).
Revised:  This is done by the enzyme ATP-sulfurylase, which uses ATP and sulfate to create adenosine 5 ′ -phosphosulfate (APS).
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Original:  Currently, there are logosophical institutions on the following countries: Argentina Brazil Israel Mexico Spain Venezuela United States Uruguay There are also students and centers of study in formation in several countries , such as: Australia, Canada, France, Germany, Italy, United Kingdom, amongst others .
Revised:  Currently, there are logosophical institutions on the following countries: Argentina Brazil Israel Mexico Spain Venezuela United States Uruguay There are also students and centers of study in formation in countries including Australia, Canada, France, Germany, Italy, United Kingdom, amongst others .
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Original:  Currently, there are logosophical institutions on the following countries: Argentina Brazil Israel Mexico Spain Venezuela United States Uruguay There are also students and centers of study in formation in several countries , such as: Australia, Canada, France, Germany, Italy, United Kingdom, amongst others .
Revised:  Currently, there are logosophical institutions on the following countries: Argentina Brazil Israel Mexico Spain Venezuela United States Uruguay There are also students and centers of study in formation in several countries , such as: Australia, Canada, France, Germany, Italy, and the United Kingdom .
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Original: Logosophy argues that the thoughts are autonomous and independent of one's individual will, and that they are born and fulfill their function under the influence of the moral or psychic states of their owner or someone else.
Revised: Logosophy argues that the thoughts can be autonomous and independent of one's individual will, and that they are born and fulfill their function under the influence of the moral or psychic states of their owner or someone else.
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Original:  Logosophy invites man to carry out a complete study of his  psychology – his character, his tendencies, his thoughts, his qualities, his deficiencies, and whatever relates directly or indirectly to the movements of his mental faculties and contemplates his spiritual state.
Revised:  Logosophy invites man to carry out a complete study of his own psychology – his character, his tendencies, his thoughts, his qualities, his deficiencies, and whatever relates directly or indirectly to the movements of his mental faculties and contemplates his spiritual state.
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Original:  It is closely related, both historically and in modern academic settings, to the medical field of patholog 
Revised:  It is closely related, both historically and in modern academic settings, to the medical field of pathology. 
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Original:  Kuda @ Bala Ditta † (1937-2003) - Legendary former Olympian and policeman.
Revised:  Kuda Ditta (1937-2003) - Legendary former Olympian and policeman.
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Original:  Kuda @ Bala Ditta † (1937-2003) - Legendary former Olympian and policeman.
Revised:  Kuda @ Bala Ditta † (1937-2003) - Former Olympian and policeman.
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Original:  Ngalinuh Bala @ Kilah Ratu - Former policeman and recipient of Grand Knight of Valour (Darjah Kebesaran Seri Pahlawan Gagah Perkasa) , the highest federal award which can be presented in Malaysia , for his gallantry during the Communist insurgent attack.
Revised:  Ngalinuh Bala @ Kilah Ratu - Former policeman and recipient of Grand Knight of Valour (Darjah Kebesaran Seri Pahlawan Gagah Perkasa) , for his gallantry during the Communist insurgent attack.
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Original:  Ngalinuh Bala @ Kilah Ratu - Former policeman and recipient of Grand Knight of Valour (Darjah Kebesaran Seri Pahlawan Gagah Perkasa), for his gallantry during the Communist insurgent attack.
Revised:  Ngalinuh Bala - Former policeman and recipient of Grand Knight of Valour (Darjah Kebesaran Seri Pahlawan Gagah Perkasa), for his gallantry during the Communist insurgent attack.
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Original:  He also set up a bible school to help penans that had been marginalised and abused. URL
Revised:  He also set up a bible school to help penans that had been marginalised and abused. 
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Original: With a population of approximately 6,600 people (2013)  the Kelabit comprise one of the smallest ethnic groups in Sarawak.
Revised: With a population of approximately 6,600 people (2013) , the Kelabit comprise one of the smallest ethnic groups in Sarawak.
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Original:  Hunting and fishing is also practised.
Revised:  Hunting and fishing are also practised.
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Original:  Domesticated buffalo are valued highly, seven of which are traditionally required for the dowry for an upper class bride.
Revised:  Domesticated buffalo are valued highly, seven of which are traditionally required for the dowry for an upper-class bride.
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Original:  Also, other people group names such as Lun Bawang, Lun Dayeh  or Southern Muruts are often associated with the Kelabit people.
Revised:  Also, other group names such as Lun Bawang, Lun Dayeh or Southern Muruts are often associated with the Kelabit people.
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Original:  Also, other people group names such as Lun Bawang, Lun Dayeh  or Southern Muruts are often associated with the Kelabit people.
Revised:  Also, other people group names such as Lun Bawang, Lun Dayeh , or Southern Muruts are often associated with the Kelabit people.
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Original:  History During the Second World War  the Kelabit, like other natives of Borneo, were co-opted by the Allies into fighting the Japanese.
Revised:  History During the Second World War , the Kelabit, like other natives of Borneo, were co-opted by the Allies into fighting the Japanese.
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Original:  History During the Second World War  the Kelabit, like other natives of Borneo, were co-opted by the Allies into fighting the Japanese.
Revised:  History During the Second World War the Kelabit, like other natives of Borneo, was co-opted by the Allies into fighting the Japanese.
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Original:  Religion After the Second World War  the Kelabit people received visits from Christian missionaries of the Borneo Evangelical Mission.
Revised:  Religion After the Second World War , the Kelabit people received visits from Christian missionaries of the Borneo Evangelical Mission.
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Original:  Prior to conversion  they had a custom of erecting megaliths and digging ditches in honour of notable individuals.
Revised:  Prior to conversion , they had a custom of erecting megaliths and digging ditches in honour of notable individuals.
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Original:  Language The Kelabit people uses Latin script that were introduced to the island by the colonialist from Europe.
Revised:  Language The Kelabit people uses Latin script that was introduced to the island by the colonialist from Europe.
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Original:  There are several dialects in the Kelabitic languages such as Lepu Potng, Padas, Trusan  and so on.
Revised:  There are several dialects in the Kelabitic languages such as Lepu Potng, Padas, Trusan , and so on.
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Original:  In rural communities  there is a division of castes namely, the nobility, the ordinary community members  and the descendants of those who were in slavery.
Revised:  In rural communities , there is a division of castes namely, the nobility, the ordinary community members and the descendants of those who were in slavery.
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Original:  In rural communities  there is a division of castes namely, the nobility, the ordinary community members  and the descendants of those who were in slavery.
Revised:  In rural communities there is a division of castes namely, the nobility, the ordinary community members , and the descendants of those who were in slavery.
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Original:  These are ancient items of Chinese origin such as, porcelain vases, beads  or gongs, as well as items that are made from pearls.
Revised:  These are ancient items of Chinese origin such as, porcelain vases, beads , or gongs, as well as items that are made from pearls.
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Original:  Such house does not have partitions that divides into rooms.
Revised:  Such house does not have partitions that divide into rooms.
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Original:  1922. In traditional society, men wear traditional loincloths, and the women would wear  skirt made of Tapa cloth (material from the inside of the tree bark).
Revised:  1922. In traditional society, men wear traditional loincloths, and women would wear skirt made of Tapa cloth (material from the inside of the tree bark).
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Original:  1922. In traditional society, men wear traditional loincloths, and the women would wear  skirt made of Tapa cloth (material from the inside of the tree bark).
Revised:  1922. In traditional society, men wear traditional loincloths, and the women would wear a skirt made of Tapa cloth (material from the inside of the tree bark).
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Original:  Kelabit people mainly eat rice, and also additionally meat, fruits, vegetables, corn  and sugar cane.
Revised:  Kelabit people mainly eat rice, as well as meat, fruits, vegetables, corn and sugar cane.
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Original:  Kelabit people mainly eat rice, and also additionally meat, fruits, vegetables, corn  and sugar cane.
Revised:  Kelabit people mainly eat rice, and also additionally meat, fruits, vegetables, corn , and sugar cane.
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Original:  Traditional Kelabit cuisine are such as :- Nubak Layak, mashed rice wrapped in Isip leaf.
Revised:  Some of the traditional Kelabit cuisines are the following :- Nubak Layak, mashed rice wrapped in Isip leaf.
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Original:  Pa’uh Ab’pa, fish cooked in brinjal, cucumber  and black fungus soup.
Revised:  Pa’uh Ab’pa, fish cooked in brinjal, cucumber , and black fungus soup.
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Original:  Pottery, blacksmithing  and wood carving are all traditional crafts of Kelabit people.
Revised:  Pottery, blacksmithing , and wood carving are all traditional crafts of Kelabit people.
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Original:  Also traditional occupation of the Kelabit people  includes needle-working.
Revised:  Agriculture is a traditional occupation of the Kelabit people includes needle-working.
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Original:  There are 69 items with pearls (necklaces, hats  and belts) decorations.
Revised:  There are 69 items with pearls (necklaces, hats , and belts) decorations.
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Original:  Earlier before they became Christians,  Kelabit people had stone amulets.
Revised:  Earlier before they became Christians, the Kelabit people had stone amulets.
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Original:  Agriculture is a traditional occupation of the Kelabit people.
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Original:  Forest gathering, hunting  and fishing are common.
Revised:  Forest gathering, hunting , and fishing are common.
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Original:  Kelabit people engages in salt extraction;
Revised:  Kelabit people engage in salt extraction;
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Original:  GISSI > Presentation > Presentation The trials carried out by GISSI have "obtained wide recognition in the international world of cardiology and are considered a methodological landmark".
Revised:  The trials carried out by GISSI have "obtained wide recognition in the international world of cardiology and are considered a methodological landmark".
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Original: The Gruppo Italiano per lo Studio della Sopravvivenza nell'Infarto Miocardico (GISSI) (Italian group for the study of the survival of Myocardial Infarction) is an influential cardiology research group founded as a collaboration between two Italian organisations – the Mario Negri Institute and the Associazione Nazionale dei Medici Cardiologi Ospedalieri (ANMCO).
Revised: The Gruppo Italiano per lo Studio della Sopravvivenza nell'Infarto Miocardico (GISSI) (Italian group for the study of the survival of Myocardial Infarction) is a cardiology research group founded as a collaboration between two Italian organisations – the Mario Negri Institute and the Associazione Nazionale dei Medici Cardiologi Ospedalieri (ANMCO).
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Original:  The trials carried out by GISSI have "obtained wide recognition in the international world of cardiology and are considered a methodological landmark".
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Original:  Four large-scale clinical trials over the past 20 years (GISSI 1, GISSI 2, GISSI 3, GISSI Prevention) have involved more than 60,000 patients with acute myocardial infarction (AMI).
Revised:  Four large-scale clinical trials (GISSI 1, GISSI 2, GISSI 3, GISSI Prevention) have involved more than 60,000 patients with acute myocardial infarction (AMI).
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Original:  Four large-scale clinical trials over the past 20 years (GISSI 1, GISSI 2, GISSI 3, GISSI Prevention) have involved more than 60,000 patients with acute myocardial infarction (AMI).
Revised:  Four large-scale clinical trials over the past 20 years (GISSI 1, GISSI 2, GISSI 3, GISSI Prevention) have involved over 60,000 patients with acute myocardial infarction (AMI).
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Original:  Four large-scale clinical trials over the past 20 years (GISSI 1, GISSI 2, GISSI 3, GISSI Prevention) have involved more than 60,000 patients with acute myocardial infarction (AMI).
Revised:  Four large-scale clinical trials over the past 20 years (GISSI 1, GISSI 2, GISSI 3, GISSI Prevention) have involved more than 60,000 people with acute myocardial infarction (AMI).
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Original:   References Further reading
Revised:  Selected publications References Further reading
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Original:  The review which used evidence from six trials also found that ranibizumab and bevacizumab had similar effects on vision .
Revised:  The review which used evidence from six trials also found that ranibizumab and bevacizumab had similar effects on vision 
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Original:  See also Age-related macular degeneration Macula%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Ophthalmolo
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Original:  See also Age-related macular degeneration Macula%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Ophthalmolo
Revised:  See also Age-related macular degeneration Macula%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Ophthalmolo
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Original:  See also Age-related macular degeneration Macula%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Ophthalmolo
Revised:  See also Age-related macular degeneration Macula%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References 
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Original:  Other symptoms which can occur include colour disturbances, and metamorphopsia (distortions in which straight lines appears wavy).
Revised:  Other symptoms which can occur include color disturbances, and metamorphopsia (distortions in which straight lines appears wavy).
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Original:  Other symptoms which can occur include colour disturbances, and metamorphopsia (distortions in which straight lines appears wavy).
Revised:  Other symptoms which can occur include colour disturbances, and metamorphopsia (distortions in which straight lines appear wavy).
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Original:  Hemorrhaging of the new blood vessels can accelerate the onset of symptoms of CNV. CNV may also include the feeling of pressure behind your eye   .
Revised:  Hemorrhaging of the new blood vessels can accelerate the onset of symptoms of CNV. CNV may also include the feeling of pressure behind your eye . .
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