wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: 《革除逸史》：“五月辛未，景隆自德州潜出，奔济南。癸酉，燕将张信入德州，夺军饷百万，转掠济南。参政铁铉、都督盛庸、参赞高魏自临邑入济南。” The Prince of Yan's army went charging to Dezhou,  Li Jinglong ran to Tie Xuan.
Revised: 《革除逸史》：“五月辛未，景隆自德州潜出，奔济南。癸酉，燕将张信入德州，夺军饷百万，转掠济南。参政铁铉、都督盛庸、参赞高魏自临邑入济南。” The Prince of Yan's army went charging to Dezhou, and Li Jinglong ran to Tie Xuan.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Dezhou was lost , the Yan troops got millions  of their war supplies and got stronger, and then they went to fight in Jinan.
Revised:  Dezhou was lost . The Yan troops got millions of their war supplies and got stronger, and then they went to fight in Jinan.
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Original:  Dezhou was lost , the Yan troops got millions  of their war supplies and got stronger, and then they went to fight in Jinan.
Revised:  Dezhou was lost , the Yan troops got millions more of their war supplies and got stronger, and then they went to fight in Jinan.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Dezhou was lost , the Yan troops got millions  of their war supplies and got stronger, and then they went to fight in Jinan.
Revised:  Dezhou was lost , the Yan troops got millions of their war supplies and then they went to fight in Jinan.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“鐵鉉，鄧人。洪武中，由國子生授禮科給事中，調都督府斷事。嘗讞疑獄，立白。太祖喜，字之曰「鼎石」。建文初，為山東參政。李景隆之北伐也，鉉督餉無乏。景隆兵敗白溝河，單騎走德州，城戍皆望風潰。鉉與參軍高巍感奮涕泣，自臨邑趨濟南，偕盛庸、宋參軍等誓以死守。燕兵攻德州，景隆走依鉉。德州陷，燕兵收其儲蓄百餘萬，勢益張。遂攻濟南，景隆復大敗，南奔。” Fight against the Yan army On the 15th day of the 5th month  Zhu Di's army attacked Jinan, and Tie Xuan and Sheng Yong defended the city.
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“鐵鉉，鄧人。洪武中，由國子生授禮科給事中，調都督府斷事。嘗讞疑獄，立白。太祖喜，字之曰「鼎石」。建文初，為山東參政。李景隆之北伐也，鉉督餉無乏。景隆兵敗白溝河，單騎走德州，城戍皆望風潰。鉉與參軍高巍感奮涕泣，自臨邑趨濟南，偕盛庸、宋參軍等誓以死守。燕兵攻德州，景隆走依鉉。德州陷，燕兵收其儲蓄百餘萬，勢益張。遂攻濟南，景隆復大敗，南奔。” Fight against the Yan army On the 15th day of the 5th month , Zhu Di's army attacked Jinan, and Tie Xuan and Sheng Yong defended the city.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“燕師遂圍濟南，鉉與庸等乘城守禦。王知不可驟克，令射書城中趣降。” On the 17th day of the 5th month  Zhu Di's Yan army diverted a river by digging into its embankment and released water into the city.
Revised: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“燕師遂圍濟南，鉉與庸等乘城守禦。王知不可驟克，令射書城中趣降。” On the 17th day of the 5th month , Zhu Di's Yan army diverted a river by digging into its embankment and released water into the city.
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Original: 《明通鑑》卷十二：鉉乃佯令守陴（牆頭）者皆哭，撤守具，遣千人出城詐降。王大喜，軍中懽呼。鉉設計，預懸鐵板城門上，伏壯士闉堵（甕城）中，候燕王入，下板擊之，又設伏，斷城外橋以遏歸師。 Zhu Di was overjoyed, and the Yan army  officers and soldiers all cheered.
Revised: 《明通鑑》卷十二：鉉乃佯令守陴（牆頭）者皆哭，撤守具，遣千人出城詐降。王大喜，軍中懽呼。鉉設計，預懸鐵板城門上，伏壯士闉堵（甕城）中，候燕王入，下板擊之，又設伏，斷城外橋以遏歸師。 Zhu Di was overjoyed, and the Yan army 's officers and soldiers all cheered.
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Original:  a supporting ambush was tp take place at the broken bridge.
Revised:  a supporting ambush was to take place at the broken bridge.
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Original:  Soon after,  Zhu Di did not yet enter the city, the iron panels were unexpectedly thrown down , Zhu Di was greatly alarmed and fled.
Revised:  Soon after, when Zhu Di did not yet enter the city, the iron panels were unexpectedly thrown down , Zhu Di was greatly alarmed and fled.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Soon after,  Zhu Di did not yet enter the city, the iron panels were unexpectedly thrown down , Zhu Di was greatly alarmed and fled.
Revised:  Soon after, Zhu Di did not yet enter the city, the iron panels were unexpectedly thrown down . Zhu Di was greatly alarmed and fled.
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Original:  The troops hidden for the ambush were exposed,  the bridge between was also not yet cut off , Zhu Di urged his horse to run quickly and go.
Revised:  The troops hidden for the ambush were exposed, and the bridge between was also not yet cut off , Zhu Di urged his horse to run quickly and go.
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Original:  The troops hidden for the ambush were exposed,  the bridge between was also not yet cut off , Zhu Di urged his horse to run quickly and go.
Revised:  The troops hidden for the ambush were exposed, the bridge between was also not yet cut off . Zhu Di urged his horse to run quickly and go.
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Original:  Furious, Zhu Di decided to use cannon to bombard the city.
Revised:  Furious, Zhu Di decided to use cannons to bombard the city.
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Original:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets, "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet"  高皇帝神牌  several times and hung them down from the top of the city walls.
Revised:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets, "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" ( 高皇帝神牌 several times and hung them down from the top of the city walls.
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Original:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets, "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet"  高皇帝神牌  several times and hung them down from the top of the city walls.
Revised:  Tue Xuan wrote on some wooden tablets, "The sublime Emperor's spirit tablet" 高皇帝神牌 ) several times and hung them down from the top of the city walls.
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Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“鉉與庸等乘城守禦。燕兵堤水灌城，築長圍，晝夜攻擊。鉉以計焚其攻具，間出兵奮擊。又遣千人出城詐降。燕王大喜，軍中皆歡呼。鉉伏壯士城上，候王入，下鐵板擊之。別設伏、斷橋。既而失約，王未入城板驟下。王驚走，伏發，橋倉卒不可斷，王鞭馬馳去。憤甚，百計進攻。凡三閱月，卒固守不能下。當是時，平安統兵二十萬，將復德州，以絕燕餉道。燕王懼，解圍北歸。” 。 Zhu Di himself launched his troops again.
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“鉉與庸等乘城守禦。燕兵堤水灌城，築長圍，晝夜攻擊。鉉以計焚其攻具，間出兵奮擊。又遣千人出城詐降。燕王大喜，軍中皆歡呼。鉉伏壯士城上，候王入，下鐵板擊之。別設伏、斷橋。既而失約，王未入城板驟下。王驚走，伏發，橋倉卒不可斷，王鞭馬馳去。憤甚，百計進攻。凡三閱月，卒固守不能下。當是時，平安統兵二十萬，將復德州，以絕燕餉道。燕王懼，解圍北歸。” Zhu Di himself launched his troops again.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  On the spot  he delimited the boundary and guard , it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it.
Revised:  On the spot , he delimited the boundary and guard , it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it.
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Original:  On the spot  he delimited the boundary and guard , it was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it.
Revised:  On the spot he delimited the boundary and guard . It was not difficult for the Yingtianfu (the Nanjing-based government of the Jianwen Emperor) to take it.
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Original:  Consequently  he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he  must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan  he failed and  was frustrated.
Revised:  Consequently , he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Consequently  he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he  must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan  he failed and  was frustrated.
Revised:  Consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash . With all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
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Original:  Consequently  he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he  must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan  he failed and  was frustrated.
Revised:  Consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength , he must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
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Original:  Consequently  he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he  must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan  he failed and  was frustrated.
Revised:  Consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he attacked, thinking that he must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
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Original:  Consequently  he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he  must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan  he failed and  was frustrated.
Revised:  Consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan . Because of Tie Xuan he failed and was frustrated.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Consequently  he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he  must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan  he failed and  was frustrated.
Revised:  Consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan , he failed and was frustrated.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Consequently  he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he  must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan  he failed and  was frustrated.
Revised:  Consequently he took advantage of Li Jinglong's dash , with all his strength used to attack, he hoped he must attack and seize Jinan , but because of Tie Xuan he failed and he was frustrated.
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Original:  He dispatched an official to go and show appreciation, to bestow gold, to confer upon him the title the third 三世.
Revised:  He dispatched an official to go and show appreciation, to bestow gold, to confer upon him the title "the third." (三世)
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Original: 《革除逸史》：“八月戊申，济南围解。以铁铉为山东左布政使，有功将士姜贵等五十四人升赏有差。” In the 12th month of that year  he was promoted to an official in the Ministry of War.
Revised: 《革除逸史》：“八月戊申，济南围解。以铁铉为山东左布政使，有功将士姜贵等五十四人升赏有差。” In the 12th month of that year , he was promoted to an official in the Ministry of War.
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Original: 《明史》（卷111）：“十二月任督军。” .
Revised: 《明史》（卷111）：“十二月任督军。” 
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Original:  The Jianwen Emperor replaced Sheng Yong with Li Jinglong as Yan General , and he assigned Tie Xuan to participate in military affairs.
Revised:  The Jianwen Emperor replaced Sheng Yong with Li Jinglong as General of Yan , and he assigned Tie Xuan to participate in military affairs.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“九月，辛未，擢鐵鉉山東布政使，參贊軍務，尋進兵部尚書。封盛庸為曆城侯，授平燕將軍，以代景隆，都督陳暉、平安副之。詔庸屯德州，平安及吳傑屯定州，徐凱屯滄州，相為犄角以困北平。”《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“当世荣之时，李景隆以败军召还，命历城侯盛庸出印代之。铉趋朝谢恩蒙，赐宴碗肉，几所建白，皆如其言。陞山东布政使，不数日拜兵部尚书，参佐盛庸。凡运筹策申军政粮草，主将多倚藉之。” That winter, Sheng Yong defeated Zhu Di at Dongchang and beheaded his general  Zhang Yu. Zhu Di fled back to Beiping (now Beijing).
Revised: 《明通鑑》（卷12）：“九月，辛未，擢鐵鉉山東布政使，參贊軍務，尋進兵部尚書。封盛庸為曆城侯，授平燕將軍，以代景隆，都督陳暉、平安副之。詔庸屯德州，平安及吳傑屯定州，徐凱屯滄州，相為犄角以困北平。”《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“当世荣之时，李景隆以败军召还，命历城侯盛庸出印代之。铉趋朝谢恩蒙，赐宴碗肉，几所建白，皆如其言。陞山东布政使，不数日拜兵部尚书，参佐盛庸。凡运筹策申军政粮草，主将多倚藉之。” That winter, Sheng Yong defeated Zhu Di at Dongchang and beheaded his general , Zhang Yu. Zhu Di fled back to Beiping (now Beijing).
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Original:  Since then, the Yan troops all went via Xuzhou, Pei county to go south.
Revised:  Since then, the Yan troops all went via Xuzhou, Pei County, to go south.
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Original:  Yang Wen's army arrived at Zhigu (in Tianjin), and was defeated by the Yan General Song Gui , not one of them arrived in Jinan.
Revised:  Yang Wen's army arrived at Zhigu (in Tianjin), and was defeated by the Yan General Song Gui ; not one of them arrived in Jinan.
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Original:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402)  the Yan army  at the south of the Xiaohe river the central army fought , Tie Xuan and the various generals  beheaded many.
Revised:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402) , the Yan army at the south of the Xiaohe river the central army fought , Tie Xuan and the various generals beheaded many.
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Original:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402)  the Yan army  at the south of the Xiaohe river the central army fought , Tie Xuan and the various generals  beheaded many.
Revised:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402) the Yan army , at the south of the Xiaohe river the central army fought , Tie Xuan and the various generals beheaded many.
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Original:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402)  the Yan army  at the south of the Xiaohe river the central army fought , Tie Xuan and the various generals  beheaded many.
Revised:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402) the Yan army at the south of the Xiaohe River, the central army fought , Tie Xuan and the various generals beheaded many.
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Original:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402)  the Yan army  at the south of the Xiaohe river the central army fought , Tie Xuan and the various generals  beheaded many.
Revised:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402) the Yan army at the south of the Xiaohe river the central army fought Tie Xuan and the various generals beheaded many.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402)  the Yan army  at the south of the Xiaohe river the central army fought , Tie Xuan and the various generals  beheaded many.
Revised:  In the fourth month of the fourth year of Jianwen (1402) the Yan army at the south of the Xiaohe river the central army fought , Tie Xuan and the various generals and beheaded many.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Both sides linked up to fight at Lingbi,  the pacification soldiers were dispersed and captured.
Revised:  Both sides linked up to fight at Lingbi, but the pacification soldiers were dispersed and captured.
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Original:  After this  Sheng Yong was also defeated.
Revised:  After this , Sheng Yong was also defeated.
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Original:  The Yan troops crossed the river,  Tie Xuan's soldiers stationed at Huaishang , and army were also defeated.
Revised:  The Yan troops crossed the river, Tie Xuan's soldiers stationed at Huaishang . That army was also defeated.
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Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“比燕兵漸逼，帝命遼東總兵官楊文將所部十萬與鉉合，絕燕後。文師至直沽，為燕將宋貴等所敗，無一至濟南者。四年四月，燕軍南綴王師於小河，鉉與諸將時有斬獲。連戰至靈璧，平安等師潰被擒。既而庸亦敗績。燕兵渡江，鉉屯淮上，兵亦潰。” 。
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“比燕兵漸逼，帝命遼東總兵官楊文將所部十萬與鉉合，絕燕後。文師至直沽，為燕將宋貴等所敗，無一至濟南者。四年四月，燕軍南綴王師於小河，鉉與諸將時有斬獲。連戰至靈璧，平安等師潰被擒。既而庸亦敗績。燕兵渡江，鉉屯淮上，兵亦潰。” 
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Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated, he was captured.
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated, Tie Xuan was captured.
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Original:  Yet he refused to surrender.
Revised:  But, he refused to surrender.
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Original:  Zhu Di commanded that his flesh be cooked and then stuffed into his mouth, asking, "Is it not sweet "?
Revised:  Zhu Di commanded that his flesh be cooked and then stuffed into his mouth, asking, "Is it not sweet ?"
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Original:  During the course of events  wished to face north to worship, but the heat caused oil to unexpectedly splash and drop.
Revised:  During the course of events , he wished to face north to worship, but the heat caused oil to unexpectedly splash and drop.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: 《明史纪事本末》（卷18）：“兵部尚书铁铉被执至京，陛见，背立廷中，正言不屈，令一顾不可得，割其耳鼻，竟不肯顾。爇其肉，纳铉口中，令啖之，问曰：“甘否？”铉厉声曰：“忠臣孝子肉有何不甘！”遂寸磔之，至死，犹喃喃骂不绝。文皇乃令舁大镬至，纳油数斛熬之，投铉尸，顷刻成煤炭；导其尸使朝上，转展向外，终不可得。文皇大怒，令内侍用铁棒十馀夹持之，使北面。笑曰：“尔今亦朝我耶！”语未毕，油沸蹙溅起丈馀，诸内侍手糜烂弃棒走，尸仍反背如故。文皇大惊诧，命葬之。” Tie Xuan's wife  Mrs.
Revised: 《明史纪事本末》（卷18）：“兵部尚书铁铉被执至京，陛见，背立廷中，正言不屈，令一顾不可得，割其耳鼻，竟不肯顾。爇其肉，纳铉口中，令啖之，问曰：“甘否？”铉厉声曰：“忠臣孝子肉有何不甘！”遂寸磔之，至死，犹喃喃骂不绝。文皇乃令舁大镬至，纳油数斛熬之，投铉尸，顷刻成煤炭；导其尸使朝上，转展向外，终不可得。文皇大怒，令内侍用铁棒十馀夹持之，使北面。笑曰：“尔今亦朝我耶！”语未毕，油沸蹙溅起丈馀，诸内侍手糜烂弃棒走，尸仍反背如故。文皇大惊诧，命葬之。” Tie Xuan's wife , Mrs.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Yang  and their two daughters were put into the Royal Academy (China), and forced to become prostitutes.
Revised:  Yang , and their two daughters were put into the Royal Academy (China), and forced to become prostitutes.
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Original:  His son  Tie Fu'an  was exiled to Hechi, and his 83-year-old father, Tie Zhongming, and his mother, Mrs. Xue, were exiled to Hainan.
Revised:  His son , Tie Fu'an was exiled to Hechi, and his 83-year-old father, Tie Zhongming, and his mother, Mrs. Xue, were exiled to Hainan.
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Original:  His son  Tie Fu'an  was exiled to Hechi, and his 83-year-old father, Tie Zhongming, and his mother, Mrs. Xue, were exiled to Hainan.
Revised:  His son Tie Fu'an , was exiled to Hechi, and his 83-year-old father, Tie Zhongming, and his mother, Mrs. Xue, were exiled to Hainan.
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Original:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor, Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保  was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, as well as the posthumous name Zhongxiang  忠襄  .《爝火录》（卷6）：“追补建文死节诸臣赠谥，立祠祀之。…
Revised:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor, Zhu Yousong, the title "Grand Protector" ( 太保 was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, as well as the posthumous name Zhongxiang 忠襄 .《爝火录》（卷6）：“追补建文死节诸臣赠谥，立祠祀之。…
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Original:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor, Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保  was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, as well as the posthumous name Zhongxiang  忠襄  .《爝火录》（卷6）：“追补建文死节诸臣赠谥，立祠祀之。…
Revised:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor, Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保 ) was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, as well as the posthumous name Zhongxiang 忠襄 .《爝火录》（卷6）：“追补建文死节诸臣赠谥，立祠祀之。…
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Original:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor, Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保  was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, as well as the posthumous name Zhongxiang  忠襄  .《爝火录》（卷6）：“追补建文死节诸臣赠谥，立祠祀之。…
Revised:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor, Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保 was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, as well as the posthumous name Zhongxiang ( 忠襄 .《爝火录》（卷6）：“追补建文死节诸臣赠谥，立祠祀之。…
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Original:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor, Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保  was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, as well as the posthumous name Zhongxiang  忠襄  .《爝火录》（卷6）：“追补建文死节诸臣赠谥，立祠祀之。…
Revised:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor, Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保 was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, as well as the posthumous name Zhongxiang 忠襄 ) .《爝火录》（卷6）：“追补建文死节诸臣赠谥，立祠祀之。…
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Original: …铁铉赠太保，谥“忠襄”。” Qing Gaozong conferred the posthumous name Zhongding  忠定  . In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong  鐵公  temples, all offering sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
Revised: …铁铉赠太保，谥“忠襄”。” Qing Gaozong conferred the posthumous name Zhongding ( 忠定 . In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong 鐵公 temples, all offering sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
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Original: …铁铉赠太保，谥“忠襄”。” Qing Gaozong conferred the posthumous name Zhongding  忠定  . In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong  鐵公  temples, all offering sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
Revised: …铁铉赠太保，谥“忠襄”。” Qing Gaozong conferred the posthumous name Zhongding 忠定 ) . In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong 鐵公 temples, all offering sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
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Original: …铁铉赠太保，谥“忠襄”。” Qing Gaozong conferred the posthumous name Zhongding  忠定  . In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong  鐵公  temples, all offering sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
Revised: …铁铉赠太保，谥“忠襄”。” Qing Gaozong conferred the posthumous name Zhongding 忠定 . In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong ( 鐵公 temples, all offering sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
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Original: …铁铉赠太保，谥“忠襄”。” Qing Gaozong conferred the posthumous name Zhongding  忠定  . In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong  鐵公  temples, all offering sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
Revised: …铁铉赠太保，谥“忠襄”。” Qing Gaozong conferred the posthumous name Zhongding 忠定 . In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong 鐵公 ) temples, all offering sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
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Original: Helen Cole became in several local civic and political organizations, and contributed to the successful gubernatorial campaigns of Henry Bellmon and Dewey Bartlett.
Revised: Helen Cole was active in several local civic and political organizations, and contributed to the successful gubernatorial campaigns of Henry Bellmon and Dewey Bartlett.
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Original:  Helen Cole was active in several local civic and political organizations, and contributed to the successful gubernatorial campaigns of Henry Bellmon and Dewey Bartlett.
Revised:  Career Cole was active in several local civic and political organizations, and contributed to the successful gubernatorial campaigns of Henry Bellmon and Dewey Bartlett.
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Original:   Cole died in Moore, Oklahoma , on April 7, 2004, aged 81.
Revised:  Cole died in Moore, Oklahoma on April 7, 2004, aged 81.
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Original: 20th-century Native Americans Category:Chickasaw people Category:Members of the Oklahoma House of Representatives Category:Native American state legislators in Oklahoma Category:Oklahoma Republicans Category:Oklahoma state senators Category:People from Moore, Oklahoma Category:People from Tishomingo, Oklahoma Category:Women mayors of places in Oklahoma Category:Women state legislators in Oklahoma Category:20th-century American politicians Category:20th-century American women politicia
Revised: 20th-century Native Americans Category:Chickasaw people Category:Members of the Oklahoma House of Representatives Category:Native American state legislators in Oklahoma Category:Oklahoma Republicans Category:Oklahoma state senators Category:People from Moore, Oklahoma Category:People from Tishomingo, Oklahoma Category:Women mayors of places in Oklahoma Category:Women state legislators in Oklahoma Category:20th-century American politicians Category:20th-century American women politicians Category:20th-century Native American wom
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Original: File:Andy Warhol 1975.jpg|Andy Warhol coined the phrase "15 minutes of fame"]] Celebrity is a condition of fame and broad public recognition of an individual or group , or occasionally a character or animal, as a result of the attention given to them by mass media.
Revised: File:Andy Warhol 1975.jpg|Andy Warhol coined the phrase "15 minutes of fame"]] Celebrity is a condition of fame and broad public recognition of an individual or group as a result of the attention given to them by mass media.
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Original:  Though celebritiescome from many different working fields , most celebrities are typically associated with the fields of sports and entertainment, or a person may be a public figure who is commonly recognizable in mass media with commercial and critical acclaim .
Revised:  Though celebritiescome from many different working fields , most celebrities are associated with the fields of sports and entertainment, or a person may be a public figure who is commonly recognizable in mass media with commercial and critical acclaim .
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Original:  Though celebritiescome from many different working fields , most celebrities are typically associated with the fields of sports and entertainment, or a person may be a public figure who is commonly recognizable in mass media with commercial and critical acclaim .
Revised:  Though celebritiescome from many different working fields , most celebrities are typically associated with the fields of sports , entertainment and politics .
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Original:  Celebrity endorsements have proven very successful around the world where, due to increasing consumerism, an individual is often considered to own a status symbol when they purchase a  celebrity-endorsed product.
Revised:  Celebrity endorsements have proven very successful around the world where, due to increasing consumerism, a celebrity-endorsed product.
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Original:  The term is a pejorative, suggesting that the individual has no particular talents or abilities.
Revised:  The term is a pejorative, suggesting the target has no particular talents or abilities.
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