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Original: Law enforcement sources  have claimed that Conrad was to be arrested and charged with manslaughter , investigating the death of Michael Jackson within the next week.
Revised: Law enforcement sources have claimed that Conrad was to be arrested and charged with manslaughter within the next week.
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Original:  In the video he has said: "I have told the truth and I have faith that the truth will prevail.
Revised:  In the video he has said: 
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Original:  As long as I keep God in my heart and you in my life I will be fine   ."
Revised:  As long as I keep God in my heart and you in my life I will be fine . ."
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Original:  As long as I keep God in my heart and you in my life I will be fine . "I have told the truth and I have faith that the truth will prevail ."
Revised:  As long as I keep God in my heart and you in my life I will be fine "I have told the truth and I have faith that the truth will prevail ."
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Original:  As long as I keep God in my heart and you in my life I will be fine . "I have told the truth and I have faith that the truth will prevail ."
Revised:  As long as I keep God in my heart and you in my life I will be fine . ."
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Original: Regional police chief Herbert Khaemba anounced today  The suspect believed to be the main organiser of the brutal murder was arrested by the police at the Kenyan border town of Taveta in hiding.
Revised: Regional police chief Herbert Khaemba anounced today : " The suspect believed to be the main organiser of the brutal murder was arrested by the police at the Kenyan border town of Taveta in hiding.
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Original:  The associations between U.S. Vice President Dick Cheney and Halliburton, has been the basis for repeated speculation over possible political improprieties and business profiteering from the war.
Revised:  The associations between U.S. Vice President Dick Cheney and Halliburton, have been the basis for repeated speculation over possible political improprieties and business profiteering from the war.
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Original:  "Ultimately my main was concern was the repeated insistence that the Rio contract be awarded to KBR without competitive bidding," Greenhouse said.
Revised:  "Ultimately my main concern was the repeated insistence that the Rio contract be awarded to KBR without competitive bidding," Greenhouse said.
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Original:  Mayberry firmly answered " yes ." He said that serving expired food ration was "an everyday occurrence, sometimes every meal."
Revised:  Mayberry firmly answered " Yes ." He said that serving expired food ration was "an everyday occurrence, sometimes every meal."
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Original:  He also explained that Halliburton systematically overcharged for the number of meals as well, saying, "they were charging for 20,000 meals and they were only serving 10,000 meals."
Revised:  He explained that Halliburton systematically overcharged for the number of meals as well, saying, "they were charging for 20,000 meals and they were only serving 10,000 meals."
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Original:  Dorgan later commented, "obviously theres no honor here, by a company that would serve outdated food to our troops in Iraq."
Revised:  Dorgan later commented, "obviously there's no honor here, by a company that would serve outdated food to our troops in Iraq."
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Original: Allegations of fraud by Halliburton, specifically with regard to its operations  Iraq, have persisted since before the Iraq War.
Revised: Allegations of fraud by Halliburton, specifically with regard to its operations in Iraq, have persisted since before the Iraq War.
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Original: As a result of the attacks, Iraqi prime minister Nouri Maliki called for a security review.
Revised: As a result of the attacks, Iraqi prime minister Nouri al-Maliki called for a security review.
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Original:  The attacks are the deadliest in Baghdad since the 24th of June , when 62 people died after a bomb on a motorcycle detonated
Revised:  The attacks are the deadliest in Baghdad since June 24 , when 62 people died after a bomb on a motorcycle detonated
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Original: According to eyewitness reports , two main attacks targeted the finance and foreign ministries.
Revised: Eyewitness reports say that two main attacks targeted the finance and foreign ministries.
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Original: USF1 team principle Ken Anderson was positive about the deal, noting that Hurley's business acumen and experience in setting up a global brand from scratch can be applied to the fledgeling team.
Revised: USF1 team principle Ken Anderson was positive about the deal, noting that Hurley's business acumen and experience in setting up a global brand from scratch can be applied to the fledgling team.
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Original:  Austrian Wurz has not competed in Formula 1 since 2007 (For Williams in China), and de la Rosa has not raced competitively in F1 since 2006, where he replaced Juan Pablo Montoya at McLaren mid-way through the season.
Revised:  Austrian Wurz has not competed in Formula 1 since 2007 (For Williams in China), and de la Rosa has not raced competitively in F1 since 2006, when he replaced Juan Pablo Montoya at McLaren mid-way through the season.
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Original:  it is unlikely that the YouTube logo will be a part of the cars' livery at this stage
Revised:  it is unlikely that the YouTube logo added to the car as this is a personal involvement independent of his current position with YouTube
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Original: Second Practice Times PosNoNation.
Revised:  PosNoNation.
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Original:  43.209717Kazuki NakajimaWilliams1: 43.225814Mark WebberRed Bull1: 43.24397Fernando AlonsoRenault1: 43.345104Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 43.3841112Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 43.389125Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 43.4191311Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 43.6371416Nico RosbergWilliams1: 43.746156Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 44.0401621Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 44.126178Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 44.356189Jarno TrulliToyota1: 44.6381910Timo GlockToyota1: 44.732203Luca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
Revised:  43.209717Kazuki NakajimaWilliams1: 43.225814Mark WebberRed Bull1: 43.24397Fernando AlonsoRenault1: 43.345104Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 43.3841112Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 43.38912522pxRobert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 43.4191311Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 43.6371416Nico RosbergWilliams1: 43.746156Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 44.0401621Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 44.126178Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 44.356189Jarno TrulliToyota1: 44.6381910Timo GlockToyota1: 44.732203Luca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
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Original:  43.209717Kazuki NakajimaWilliams1: 43.225814Mark WebberRed Bull1: 43.24397Fernando AlonsoRenault1: 43.345104Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 43.3841112Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 43.389125Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 43.4191311Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 43.6371416Nico RosbergWilliams1: 43.746156Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 44.0401621Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 44.126178Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 44.356189Jarno TrulliToyota1: 44.6381910Timo GlockToyota1: 44.732203Luca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
Revised:  43.209717Kazuki NakajimaWilliams1: 43.225814Mark WebberRed Bull1: 43.24397Fernando AlonsoRenault1: 43.345104Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 43.3841112Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 43.389125Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 43.4191311Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 43.637141622pxNico RosbergWilliams1: 43.746156Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 44.0401621Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 44.126178Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 44.356189Jarno TrulliToyota1: 44.6381910Timo GlockToyota1: 44.732203Luca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
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Original:  43.209717Kazuki NakajimaWilliams1: 43.225814Mark WebberRed Bull1: 43.24397Fernando AlonsoRenault1: 43.345104Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 43.3841112Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 43.389125Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 43.4191311Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 43.6371416Nico RosbergWilliams1: 43.746156Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 44.0401621Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 44.126178Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 44.356189Jarno TrulliToyota1: 44.6381910Timo GlockToyota1: 44.732203Luca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
Revised:  43.209717Kazuki NakajimaWilliams1: 43.225814Mark WebberRed Bull1: 43.24397Fernando AlonsoRenault1: 43.345104Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 43.3841112Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 43.389125Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 43.4191311Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 43.6371416Nico RosbergWilliams1: 43.746156Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 44.0401621Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 44.126178Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 44.356189Jarno TrulliToyota1: 44.638191022pxTimo GlockToyota1: 44.732203Luca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
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Original:  43.209717Kazuki NakajimaWilliams1: 43.225814Mark WebberRed Bull1: 43.24397Fernando AlonsoRenault1: 43.345104Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 43.3841112Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 43.389125Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 43.4191311Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 43.6371416Nico RosbergWilliams1: 43.746156Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 44.0401621Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 44.126178Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 44.356189Jarno TrulliToyota1: 44.6381910Timo GlockToyota1: 44.732203Luca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
Revised:  43.209717Kazuki NakajimaWilliams1: 43.225814Mark WebberRed Bull1: 43.24397Fernando AlonsoRenault1: 43.345104Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 43.3841112Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 43.389125Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 43.4191311Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 43.6371416Nico RosbergWilliams1: 43.746156Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 44.0401621Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 44.126178Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 44.356189Jarno TrulliToyota1: 44.6381910Timo GlockToyota1: 44.73220322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
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Original:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.739129Jarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.156176Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.350183Luca BadoerFerrari1: 42.0171911Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.089201 Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
Revised:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.73912922pxJarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.156176Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.350183Luca BadoerFerrari1: 42.0171911Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.089201 Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
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Original:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.739129Jarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.156176Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.350183Luca BadoerFerrari1: 42.0171911Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.089201 Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
Revised:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.739129Jarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.15617622pxNick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.350183Luca BadoerFerrari1: 42.0171911Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.089201 Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
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Original:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.739129Jarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.156176Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.350183Luca BadoerFerrari1: 42.0171911Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.089201 Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
Revised:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.739129Jarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.156176Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.35018322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1: 42.0171911Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.089201 Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
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Original:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.739129Jarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.156176Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.350183Luca BadoerFerrari1: 42.0171911Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.089201 Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
Revised:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.739129Jarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.156176Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.350183Luca BadoerFerrari1: 42.017191122pxJaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.089201 Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
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Original:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.739129Jarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.156176Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.350183Luca BadoerFerrari1: 42.0171911Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.089201 Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
Revised:  40.59675Robert KubicaBMW Sauber1: 40.643821Giancarlo FisichellaForce India1: 40.681915Sebastian VettelRed Bull1: 40.723102Heikki KovalainenMcLaren1: 40.738114Kimi RäikkönenFerrari1: 40.739129Jarno TrulliToyota1: 40.770138Romain GrosjeanRenault1: 40.7871414Mark WebberRed Bull1: 40.9561510Timo GlockToyota1: 40.9851612Sébastien BuemiToro Rosso1: 41.156176Nick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1: 41.350183Luca BadoerFerrari1: 42.0171911Jaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1: 42.08920122px Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
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Original: 43.2439722pxFernando AlonsoRenault1:43.34510422 pxKimi RäikkönenFerrari1:43.384111222pxSébastien BuemiToro Rosso1:43.38912522pxRobert KubicaBMW Sauber1:43.419131122pxJaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1:43.637141622pxNico RosbergWilliams1:43.74615622pxNick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1:44.040162122pxGiancarlo FisichellaForce India1:44.12617822pxRomain GrosjeanRenault1:44.35618922pxJarno TrulliToyota1:44.638191022pxTimo GlockToyota1:44.73220322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
Revised: 43.2439722pxFernando AlonsoRenault1:43.34510422 px|borderKimi RäikkönenFerrari1:43.384111222pxSébastien BuemiToro Rosso1:43.38912522pxRobert KubicaBMW Sauber1:43.419131122pxJaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1:43.637141622pxNico RosbergWilliams1:43.74615622pxNick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1:44.040162122pxGiancarlo FisichellaForce India1:44.12617822pxRomain GrosjeanRenault1:44.35618922pxJarno TrulliToyota1:44.638191022pxTimo GlockToyota1:44.73220322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
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Original: 40.64382122pxGiancarlo FisichellaForce India1:40.68191522pxSebastian VettelRed Bull1:40.72310222 pxHeikki KovalainenMcLaren1:40.73811422 pxKimi RäikkönenFerrari1:40.73912922pxJarno TrulliToyota1:40.77013822pxRomain GrosjeanRenault1:40.787141422pxMark WebberRed Bull1:40.956151022pxTimo GlockToyota1:40.985161222pxSébastien BuemiToro Rosso1:41.15617622pxNick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1:41.35018322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1:42.017191122pxJaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1:42.08920122px Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
Revised: 40.64382122pxGiancarlo FisichellaForce India1:40.68191522pxSebastian VettelRed Bull1:40.72310222 px|borderHeikki KovalainenMcLaren1:40.73811422 pxKimi RäikkönenFerrari1:40.73912922pxJarno TrulliToyota1:40.77013822pxRomain GrosjeanRenault1:40.787141422pxMark WebberRed Bull1:40.956151022pxTimo GlockToyota1:40.985161222pxSébastien BuemiToro Rosso1:41.15617622pxNick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1:41.35018322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1:42.017191122pxJaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1:42.08920122px Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
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Original: 40.64382122pxGiancarlo FisichellaForce India1:40.68191522pxSebastian VettelRed Bull1:40.72310222 pxHeikki KovalainenMcLaren1:40.73811422 pxKimi RäikkönenFerrari1:40.73912922pxJarno TrulliToyota1:40.77013822pxRomain GrosjeanRenault1:40.787141422pxMark WebberRed Bull1:40.956151022pxTimo GlockToyota1:40.985161222pxSébastien BuemiToro Rosso1:41.15617622pxNick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1:41.35018322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1:42.017191122pxJaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1:42.08920122px Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
Revised: 40.64382122pxGiancarlo FisichellaForce India1:40.68191522pxSebastian VettelRed Bull1:40.72310222 pxHeikki KovalainenMcLaren1:40.73811422 px|borderKimi RäikkönenFerrari1:40.73912922pxJarno TrulliToyota1:40.77013822pxRomain GrosjeanRenault1:40.787141422pxMark WebberRed Bull1:40.956151022pxTimo GlockToyota1:40.985161222pxSébastien BuemiToro Rosso1:41.15617622pxNick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1:41.35018322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1:42.017191122pxJaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1:42.08920122px Lewis HamiltonMcLaren1:43.214
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Original: 43.2439722pxFernando AlonsoRenault1:43.34510422px|borderKimi RäikkönenFerrari1:43.384111222pxSébastien BuemiToro Rosso1:43.38912522 pxRobert KubicaBMW Sauber1:43.419131122pxJaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1:43.637141622pxNico RosbergWilliams1:43.74615622pxNick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1:44.040162122pxGiancarlo FisichellaForce India1:44.12617822pxRomain GrosjeanRenault1:44.35618922pxJarno TrulliToyota1:44.638191022pxTimo GlockToyota1:44.73220322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
Revised: 43.2439722pxFernando AlonsoRenault1:43.34510422px|borderKimi RäikkönenFerrari1:43.384111222pxSébastien BuemiToro Rosso1:43.38912522 px|borderRobert KubicaBMW Sauber1:43.419131122pxJaime AlguersuariToro Rosso1:43.637141622pxNico RosbergWilliams1:43.74615622pxNick HeidfeldBMW Sauber1:44.040162122pxGiancarlo FisichellaForce India1:44.12617822pxRomain GrosjeanRenault1:44.35618922pxJarno TrulliToyota1:44.638191022pxTimo GlockToyota1:44.73220322pxLuca BadoerFerrari1:45.840PosNoNation.
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Original: The next sessionwill be free practice on Saturday, at 11 {{      :00 CET.
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Original: Saturday Morning Practice File:Adrian Sutil Jerez Mar 2009 4385a.jpg|Adrian Sutil%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% image credit|MorganaF1 Adrian Sutil in the Force India impressed in the final practice session before qualifying by posting the fastest time in a session which was stopped mid-way after Sebastian Vettel's Red Bull car suffered an engine failure, leaving a trail of oil out on the circuit.
Revised:  File:Adrian Sutil Jerez Mar 2009 4385a.jpg|Adrian Sutil%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% image credit|MorganaF1 Adrian Sutil in the Force India impressed in the final practice session before qualifying by posting the fastest time in a session which was stopped mid-way after Sebastian Vettel's Red Bull car suffered an engine failure, leaving a trail of oil out on the circuit.
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Original: Saturday Morning Practice File:Adrian Sutil Jerez Mar 2009 4385a.jpg|Adrian Sutil%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% image credit|MorganaF1 Adrian Sutil in the Force India impressed in the final practice session before qualifying by posting the fastest time in a session which was stopped mid-way after Sebastian Vettel's Red Bull car suffered an engine failure, leaving a trail of oil out on the circuit.
Revised: Saturday Morning Practice %DIFDELCMD < {{%%% image credit|MorganaF1 Adrian Sutil in the Force India impressed in the final practice session before qualifying by posting the fastest time in a session which was stopped mid-way after Sebastian Vettel's Red Bull car suffered an engine failure, leaving a trail of oil out on the circuit.
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Original: Saturday Morning Practice File:Adrian Sutil Jerez Mar 2009 4385a.jpg|Adrian Sutil%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% image credit|MorganaF1 Adrian Sutil in the Force India impressed in the final practice session before qualifying by posting the fastest time in a session which was stopped mid-way after Sebastian Vettel's Red Bull car suffered an engine failure, leaving a trail of oil out on the circuit.
Revised: Saturday Morning Practice File:Adrian Sutil Jerez Mar 2009 4385a.jpg|Adrian Sutil%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% Adrian Sutil in the Force India impressed in the final practice session before qualifying by posting the fastest time in a session which was stopped mid-way after Sebastian Vettel's Red Bull car suffered an engine failure, leaving a trail of oil out on the circuit.
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Original: Saturday Morning Practice File:Adrian Sutil Jerez Mar 2009 4385a.jpg|Adrian Sutil%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% image credit|MorganaF1 Adrian Sutil in the Force India impressed in the final practice session before qualifying by posting the fastest time in a session which was stopped mid-way after Sebastian Vettel's Red Bull car suffered an engine failure, leaving a trail of oil out on the circuit.
Revised: Saturday Morning Practice File:Adrian Sutil Jerez Mar 2009 4385a.jpg|Adrian Sutil%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% image credit|MorganaF1 
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Original:  In the five minutes that remained once the session restarted, the fastest time changed hands on many occasions, but once the chequered flag came out, Sutil had once again come out on top, with his team mate Fisichella down in 6th place.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Improvements from the new drivers Romain Grosjean and Jaime Alguersuari were seen, whilst stand-in Luca Badoer once again struggled at the bottom of the timesheet, over 3 seconds off the pace of Sutil.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  First Practice TimesSecond Practice TimesThird Practice TimesPosNoNation.
Revised:  First Practice TimesSecond Practice TimesPosNoNation.
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Original: The leaked list is available online, and contains personal information of about 10,000 BNP members, including details of their family, work and contact details.
Revised: The leaked list is available online, and contains personal information of about 10,000 BNP members, including information on their family, work and contact details.
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Original:  Certains professions forbid BNP membership, and the list resulted in sackings .
Revised:  Certain professions forbid BNP membership, and the list resulted in sackings .
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Original:  Certains professions forbid BNP membership, and the list resulted in sackings .
Revised:  Certains professions forbid BNP membership, and the list 's publication resulted in several dismissals .
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