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Original: Saturday December 04, 2004, Rondonia, Brazil - According to Agência Estado, Brazilian newspaper, members of the Brazilian Landless Workers Movement (MST) have  beating to death Paulo Brizola Nunes.
Revised: Saturday December 04, 2004, Rondonia, Brazil - According to Agência Estado, Brazilian newspaper, members of the Brazilian Landless Workers Movement (MST) have been accused of beating to death Paulo Brizola Nunes.
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Original:  Mr  Nunes, 51 years old, was an employee of the Noroeste Farm (the farm is in risk of been invaded by the MST), in Cabixi, 820 km (510 miles) away from  Porto Velho, Rondonia.
Revised:  Mr . Nunes, 51 years old, was an employee of the Noroeste Farm (the farm is in risk of been invaded by the MST), in Cabixi, 820 km (510 miles) away from Porto Velho, Rondonia.
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Original:  Mr  Nunes, 51 years old, was an employee of the Noroeste Farm (the farm is in risk of been invaded by the MST), in Cabixi, 820 km (510 miles) away from  Porto Velho, Rondonia.
Revised:  Mr Nunes, 51 years old, was an employee of the Noroeste Farm in Cabixi, 820 km (510 miles) away from Porto Velho, Rondonia.
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Original:   Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were travelling in a motorcycle when they were allegedly atacked by a group of the MST, who used barbed wire extended along the road to bring the two men down.
Revised:  Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were travelling in a motorcycle when they were allegedly atacked by a group from MST, who used barbed wire extended along the road to bring the two men down.
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Original:  Thge men were then pummelled using axes and sticks.
Revised:  The men were then pummelled using axes and sticks.
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Original:  The MST is a large (in 2003 there were about 632 MST camps in Brazil  ) Marxist-Maoist inspired movement of agricultural workers in Brazil, officially founded in 1984.
Revised:  The MST is a large (in 2003 there were 632 MST camps in Brazil ) Marxist-Maoist inspired movement of agricultural workers in Brazil, officially founded in 1984.
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Original:  The movement also receives funds by selling videos of their invasions and other products  like books, flags and caps.
Revised:  The movement also receives funds by selling videos of their invasions and other products , like books, flags and caps.
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Original:  Some Brazilians have protested against the violence of MST. MST claims to be defending themselves because many farms hire gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions  .
Revised:  Some Brazilians have protested against the violence of MST. Many farms hire gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions .
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Original: Saturday December 04, 2004, Rondonia, Brazil - According to Agência Estado, members of the Brazilian Landless Workers Movement (MST) have been accused of beating to death Paulo Brizola Nunes.
Revised: Saturday December 04, 2004, Rondonia, Brazil - According to Agência Estado, members of the Brazilian Landless Workers Movement (MST) are accused of beating to death Paulo Brizola Nunes.
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Original:  The farm has been considered to be at risk of invasion due to the proximity of a MST encampment.
Revised:  The farm was considered at risk of invasion due to the proximity of a MST encampment.
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Original:  The farm has been considered to be at risk of invasion due to the proximity of a MST encampment.
Revised:  The farm has been considered to be at risk of invasion due to its proximity to a MST encampment.
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Original:  Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were travelling in a motorcycle when they were allegedly atacked by a group from MST , who used barbed wire extended along the road to bring the two men down.
Revised:  Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were on a motorcycle when they were allegedly atacked by a group from MST , who used barbed wire extended along the road to bring the two men down.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were travelling in a motorcycle when they were allegedly atacked by a group from MST , who used barbed wire extended along the road to bring the two men down.
Revised:  Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were travelling in a motorcycle when they were allegedly atacked . MST members allegedly extended barbed wire across the road to bring the two men down.
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Original:  Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were travelling in a motorcycle when they were allegedly atacked by a group from MST , who used barbed wire extended along the road to bring the two men down.
Revised:  Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were travelling in a motorcycle when they were allegedly atacked by a group from MST , who used barbed wire extended along the road to down the two men down.
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Original:  The men were then pummelled using axes and sticks.
Revised:  The men were then pummelled with axes and sticks.
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Original:  One victim, Coco , was able to escape and obtain help at the Police station in Cabixi .
Revised:  Coco escaped to a Cabixi police station but
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Original:  The MST is a large (in 2003 there were 632 MST camps in Brazil, containing 116,382 families) Marxist-Maoist inspired movement of agricultural workers in Brazil, officially founded in 1984.
Revised:  MST is a large (in 2003 there were 632 MST camps in Brazil, containing 116,382 families) Marxist-Maoist inspired movement of agricultural workers in Brazil, officially founded in 1984.
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Original:  The MST is a large (in 2003 there were 632 MST camps in Brazil, containing 116,382 families) Marxist-Maoist inspired movement of agricultural workers in Brazil, officially founded in 1984.
Revised:  The MST is a large Marxist-Maoist inspired movement of agricultural workers in Brazil, officially founded in 1984.
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Original:  MST claim to pursue equitable redistribution of Brazilian farmland.
Revised:  The movement claims to pursue equitable redistribution of Brazilian farmland.
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Original:   According to a recent report on labor standards in Brazil, conditions for laborers are poor . MST's most visible tactic has been the occupation of mostly privately-held plantations and landholdings, sometimes armed with carving knifes and scythes.
Revised:  According to a recent report on labor standards in Brazil, conditions for laborers are poor . 
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Original:  The movement also receives funds by selling videos of their invasions and other products , like books, flags and caps.
Revised:  The movement also receives funds by selling videos of their invasions and other products like books, flags and caps.
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Original:  Some Brazilians have protested against the violence of MST . Many farms hire gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions , and MST claims the violence to be a result of them defending themselves from the gunfighters.
Revised:  Some Brazilians have protested MST's use of violence . Many farms hire gunfighters to protect their properties from invasions , and MST claims the violence to be a result of them defending themselves from the gunfighters.
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Original: Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were on a motorcycle when they were allegedly atacked . MST members allegedly extended barbed wire across the road to down the two men, who were then pummelled with axes and sticks.
Revised: Nunes and another employee of Noroeste Farm known as "Coco" were on a motorcycle when they were allegedly attacked . MST members allegedly extended barbed wire across the road to down the two men, who were then pummelled with axes and sticks.
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Original:  Senators met Saturday in Washington  during a driving snowstorm in a frenzied effort to move forward on President Barack Obama's top domestic priority.
Revised:  Senators met Saturday in Washington , D.C. during a driving snowstorm in a frenzied effort to move forward on President Barack Obama's top domestic priority.
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Original: After the disputed 2009 Iranian presidential election, Montazeri supported the Opposition and declared the result of the election fraudulent.
Revised: After the disputed 2009 Iranian presidential election, Montazeri supported the opposition and declared the result of the election fraudulent.
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Original:  The Times and other newspapers reported that the Iranian authorities were concerned that the burial, due to start at 9am local time tomorrow  would be a focus for more Opposition protests against the Iranian government.
Revised:  The Times and other newspapers reported that the Iranian authorities were concerned that the burial, due to start at 09.00 local time tomorrow would be a focus for more Opposition protests against the Iranian government.
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Original:  The Times and other newspapers reported that the Iranian authorities were concerned that the burial, due to start at 9am local time tomorrow  would be a focus for more Opposition protests against the Iranian government.
Revised:  The Times and other newspapers reported that the Iranian authorities were concerned that the burial, due to start at 9am local time tomorrow would be a focus for more opposition protests against the Iranian government.
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Original:  Montazeri had been a key leader in the 1979 Iranian revolution and at one time was expected to succeed Ayatollah Ruhollah Khomeini as the Supreme Leader of Iran, before he fell out with Khomeini.
Revised:  Montazeri had been a key leader in the 1979 Iranian revolution and at one time was expected to succeed Ayatollah Ruhollah Khomeini as the Supreme Leader of Iran, until he fell out with Khomeini.
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Original:  Their song Killing in the Name pushed the X Factor winner's new single '' The Climb into second place.
Revised:  Their song Killing in the Name pushed the X Factor winner's new single The Climb into second place.
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Original:  McElderry had been due to appear on the show, but did not arrive  
Revised:  McElderry had been due to appear on the show, but did not arrive . 
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Original:  McElderry had been due to appear on the show, but did not arrive .
Revised:  McElderry had been due to appear on the show, but did not arrive 
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Original:  The unprecedented success of the ‘Rage Against the X-Factor’ campaign has inspired independent filmmakers in the Northwest of England to establish a spoof Facebook page ‘Rage Against the BBFC’ which campaigns for the introduction of a Voluntary 'Unrated 18' Certificate in the UK
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Original: The result was announced on  BBC Radio 1's chart show this evening by Scott Mills.
Revised: The result was announced on w: BBC Radio 1's chart show this evening by Scott Mills.
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Original:  There, crippling snow, amounting to as much as 24 inches, crippled travel.
Revised:  There, crippling snow, amounting to as much as 24 inches, heavily disrupted travel.
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Original:  A twenty-mile traffic backup on Interstate 81 miles was also reported.
Revised:  A twenty-mile traffic backup on Interstate 81 was also reported.
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Original:  Customers were still attempting to complete purchases "I got some already, but had to put the rest of it aside," Oliver said  
Revised:  Customers were still attempting to complete purchases "I got some already, but had to put the rest of it aside," Oliver said . 
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Original: FDNY officials estimate that about 5000 customers were displaced during the fire, although some waited the two hours for the store to reopen.
Revised: New York City Fire Department officials estimate that about 5000 customers were displaced during the fire, although some waited the two hours for the store to reopen.
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Original:  Shopper Stanley Rafal said  " It 's going to kill a lot of business."
Revised:  Shopper Stanley Rafal said that " It 's going to kill a lot of business."
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Original:  Shopper Stanley Rafal said  " It 's going to kill a lot of business."
Revised:  Shopper Stanley Rafal said " it 's going to kill a lot of business."
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Original: China and Indonesia, two  giants of Asia  have welcomed UN Climate Change Conference outcome.
Revised: China and Indonesia, two of the giants of Asia have welcomed UN Climate Change Conference outcome.
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Original: China and Indonesia, two  giants of Asia  have welcomed UN Climate Change Conference outcome.
Revised: China and Indonesia, two giants of Asia , have welcomed UN Climate Change Conference outcome.
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Original:  The chinese foreign minister and Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono, the 6th President of Indonesia, appreciated the result of the UN Climate Change Conference.
Revised:  The Chinese foreign minister and Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono, the 6th President of Indonesia, appreciated the result of the UN Climate Change Conference.
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Original:  Barack Obama defended the Copenhagen Accord.
Revised:  Obama defended the Copenhagen Accord.
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Original:  Richard Black, who is a journalist of BBC environment says the tipping point is the 2 degrees celsius .
Revised:  Richard Black, who is a journalist of BBC environment says the tipping point is the 2 degrees Celsius .
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Original: The Copenhagen Accord is based on a proposal tabled by USA , China, India, Brazil and South Africa.
Revised: The Copenhagen Accord is based on a proposal tabled by US , China, India, Brazil and South Africa.
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Original:  Category:United States Category:United Kingdom Category:Indonesia Category:China Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Environment Category:United Nations
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Original:  Obama defended the Copenhagen Accord . Obama the medium between the main new powers.
Revised:  Obama defended the Copenhagen Accord and the medium between the main new powers.
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Original:  Obama defended the Copenhagen Accord and  the medium between the main new powers.
Revised:  Obama defended the Copenhagen Accord and was the medium between the main new powers.
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Original: The fire department were called at around 2335 GMT on Saturday to a fire that was taking place in a four-bedroom property on Ely Road in Croydon.
Revised: The fire department were called at around 2335 GMT on Saturday to a fire in a four-bedroom property on Ely Road in Croydon.
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Original:  It has been reported that there were three fire trucks and 15 firemen at the scene of the incident . Using breathing apparatus, the fire crew were able to rescue the man from the building.
Revised:  Reports indicate three fire trucks and 15 firemen at the scene of the incident . Using breathing apparatus, the fire crew were able to rescue the man from the building.
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Original:  It has been reported that there were three fire trucks and 15 firemen at the scene of the incident . Using breathing apparatus, the fire crew were able to rescue the man from the building.
Revised:  It has been reported that there were three fire trucks and fifteen firemen at the scene of the incident . Using breathing apparatus, the fire crew were able to rescue the man from the building.
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Original:  It has been reported that there were three fire trucks and 15 firemen at the scene of the incident . Using breathing apparatus, the fire crew were able to rescue the man from the building.
Revised:  It has been reported that there were three fire trucks and 15 firemen at the scene of the incident ; using breathing apparatus, the fire crew were able to rescue the man from the building.
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Original:  He was taken to a hospital however  doctors were unable to save the man.
Revised:  He was taken to a hospital however , doctors were unable to save the man.
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Original:  He later died as a result of the effects of smoke inhalation.
Revised:  He later died as a result of the smoke inhalation.
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Original:  The gentleman 's next of kin have now received the news .
Revised:  The deceased 's next of kin have now received the news .
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Original:  The gentleman 's next of kin have now received the news .
Revised:  The gentleman 's next of kin have been notified .
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Original:  The time taken to put out the fire was less than 30 minutes.
Revised:  The time taken to extinguish the fire was less than 30 minutes.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the police has said: " We  were called to a fire at an address in Ely Road [on Saturday] evening.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the police said, " We were called to a fire at an address in Ely Road [on Saturday] evening.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the police has said: " We  were called to a fire at an address in Ely Road [on Saturday] evening.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the police has said: " w were called to a fire at an address in Ely Road [on Saturday] evening.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the police has said: " We  were called to a fire at an address in Ely Road [on Saturday] evening.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the police has said: " We e were called to a fire at an address in Ely Road [on Saturday] evening.
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Original: Somalia's weak transitional government is under growing pressure to take tough measures against rebels, especially the al-Shabaab group.
Revised: Somalia's weak transitional government is under growing pressure to take tough measures against rebels, especially the al-Shabab group.
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Original:  " However, what is still not confirmed is whether or not the Swedish newspaper, Aftonbladet, was correct when it claimed that Israel was stealing organs from both dead and living Palestinians, and whether or not Israelis were intentionally killing Palestinians for their organs.
Revised:  However, what is still not confirmed is whether or not the Swedish newspaper, Aftonbladet, was correct when it claimed that Israel was stealing organs from both dead and living Palestinians, and whether or not Israelis were intentionally killing Palestinians for their organs.
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Original:  Palestinian young people were disappearing in the areas and five days later they appear back in the villages with an autopsy done on them against the will of the families."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% What is confirmed, however, is that dead Palestinians had their organs, such as corneas, harvested for educational purposes, and for shipment to Israeli hospitals
Revised:  Palestinian young people were disappearing in the areas and five days later they appear back in the villages with an autopsy done on them against the will of the families."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: In     the interview, Hiss claims that, "body parts were used by hospitals for transplant purposes - cornea transplants.
Revised: In In the interview, Hiss claims that, "body parts were used by hospitals for transplant purposes - cornea transplants.
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Original:  Facts from the interview were later confirmed by an Israeli military statement on the issue which claimed, "This activity ended a decade ago and does not happen any longer.  
Revised:  Facts from the interview were later confirmed by an Israeli military statement on the issue which claimed, "This activity ended a decade ago and does not happen any longer. " 
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Original:  The violence had occurred after a few weeks of tension between the two, due mainly to competition for land, which is becoming scarcer due to desertification.
Revised:  The violence had occurred after a few weeks of tension between the two, mainly due to competition for land, which is becoming scarcer due to desertification.
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Original:  The violence had occurred after a few weeks of tension between the two, due mainly to competition for land, which is becoming scarcer due to desertification.
Revised:  The violence had occurred after a few weeks of tension between the two, due mainly to competition for land, which is becoming scarcer because of desertification.
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Original: The bill would extend health insurance coverage to 30 million US residents who now lack it, and bar insurance companies from practices such as denying coverage due to pre-existing conditions.
Revised: The bill would extend health insurance coverage to 30 million US residents who currently lack it, and bar insurance companies from practices such as denying coverage due to pre-existing conditions.
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Original: The bill would extend health insurance coverage to 30 million US residents who now lack it, and bar insurance companies from practices such as denying coverage due to pre-existing conditions.
Revised: The bill would extend health insurance coverage to 30 million US residents who now lack it, and forbid insurance companies from practices such as denying coverage due to pre-existing conditions.
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Original:  Colin Norris, 33, from Glasgow, gave his victims overdoses of insulin which sent them into comas   
Revised:  Colin Norris, 33, from Glasgow, gave his victims overdoses of insulin which sent them into comas . 
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Original: 250px|St James's Hospital in Leeds, UK A man from Scotland who killed four elderly woman and attempted to murder a fifth while working as a nurse in England has lost his appeal.
Revised: 250px|St James's Hospital in Leeds, UK A man from Scotland who killed four elderly women and attempted to murder a fifth while working as a nurse in England has lost his appeal.
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Original:  He said this possibility had never bee properly investigated.
Revised:  He said this possibility had never been properly investigated.
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Original:  Mousehole 75-year-old Charles Parker, who is living in St.
Revised:  75-year-old Charles Parker, who is living in St.
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Original:  The vehicle, which was carrying 48 passengers as well as the driver who were travelling back from a journey to the village of Mousehole to see Christmas lights.
Revised:  The vehicle, which was carrying 48 passengers as well as the driver , were travelling back from a journey to the village of Mousehole to see Christmas lights.
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Original:  The accident occurred at 2215 GMT on Tuesday in the village of Townshend, not far away from the town of Hayle.
Revised:  The accident occurred at 2215 GMT on Tuesday in the village of Townshend, not far from the town of Hayle.
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Original:  The road conditions at the time were icy, which may explain why the accident occurred.
Revised:  Road conditions at the time were icy, which may explain why the accident occurred.
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Original:  The first police car that arrived at the scene of the accident lost control on the icy road and crashed into the already overturned coach.
Revised:  The first police car that arrived at the scene lost control on the icy road and crashed into the already overturned coach.
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Original:  The two police officers in the police car were not injured , however the earlier crash had caused the deaths of two women.
Revised:  The two officers in the police car were not injured , however the earlier crash had caused the deaths of two women.
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Original:  The two police officers in the police car were not injured , however the earlier crash had caused the deaths of two women.
Revised:  The two police officers in the car were uninjured , however the earlier crash had caused the deaths of two women.
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Original:  47 people were also injured, five of them seriously.
Revised:  47 people were injured, five of them seriously.
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