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Original: Clinton is on a two-day visit to Turkey and made some of her comments during a news conference on the Turkish channel during an event where she answered questions from Turkish citizens .
Revised: Clinton is on a two-day visit to Turkey and made some of her comments during a news conference on the Turkish channel during an event where she answered questions .
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Original: Space Shuttle Atlantis  completed its last journey with a landing at , located in Florida, United States , at 0557 (0957 ) yesterday.
Revised: Space Shuttle Atlantis has completed its last journey with a landing at , located in Florida, United States , at 0557 (0957 ) yesterday.
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Original:  The massive concrete structure was underestimated in its ability to withstand the timed and computer designed blasting pattern  .
Revised:  The massive concrete structure 's ability to withstand the timed and computer designed blasting pattern .
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Original:  The massive concrete structure was underestimated in its ability to withstand the timed and computer designed blasting pattern  .
Revised:  The massive concrete structure was underestimated in its ability to withstand the timed and computer designed blasting pattern was underestimated .
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Original: Scissors such as these will still be prohibited on US flights -- only scissors under 4 " will be permitted.
Revised: WHAT UP HOMIES IM BORED CAPS LOCK PRIDE 4 " will be permitted.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% As part of a broader security realignment, TSA screeners will begin performing more random searches of carry-on bags, pat downs, and hand-wand searches of travelers.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  "By incorporating unpredictability into our procedures and eliminating low-threat items, we can better focus our efforts on stopping individuals that wish to do us harm," TSA chief Kip Hawley said.
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Original: Revelations that the US commander of the Multinational Security Transition Command in Iraq had no knowledge of the National Strategy for Victory in Iraq document released by the President and speculation that it was chiefly authored by a public opinion analyst have led to calls that the drafted 'strategy' is targetting US public opinion, not the Iraqi insurgency .
Revised: Revelations that the US commander of the Multinational Security Transition Command in Iraq had no knowledge of the National Strategy for Victory in Iraq . The document was written, at least in part, by a person recruited by the Bush administration this year .
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Original:  A metadata tag on " National Strategy for Victory in Iraq " document posted on the White House website identified its author as a computer user 'feaver_p'.
Revised:  A metadata tag on the National Strategy for Victory in Iraq " document posted on the White House website identified its author as a computer user 'feaver_p'.
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Original:  A metadata tag on " National Strategy for Victory in Iraq " document posted on the White House website identified its author as a computer user 'feaver_p'.
Revised:  A metadata tag on " National Strategy for Victory in Iraq document posted on the White House website identified its author as a computer user 'feaver_p'.
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Original: The United States  military, political and economic strategy for Iraq, outlined last week by President Bush in a speech at the Naval Academy in Annapolis, Maryland, was based by a 35-page document titled the National Strategy for Victory in Iraq.
Revised: The United States The military, political and economic strategy for Iraq, outlined last week by President Bush in a speech at the Naval Academy in Annapolis, Maryland, was based by a 35-page document titled the National Strategy for Victory in Iraq.
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Original:  The document was written, at least in part, by a person recruited by the Bush administration this year.
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Original:  A metadata tag on the National Strategy for Victory in Iraq document posted on the White House website identified its author as a computer user 'feaver_p'.
Revised:  A metadata tag on the document posted on the White House website identified its author as a computer user 'feaver_p'.
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Original:  Dr. Feaver is a political scientist at the Duke University.
Revised:  A political scientist at the Duke University.
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Original:  He carried out an analysis of public opinion polls about the Iraq war and public tolerance for US casualities in wars . Dr. Feaver concluded from his study that US public opinion will support military engagement abroad, despite growing casualities, provided that the public believed that the war was being faught for a worthy cause and that victory was achievable.
Revised:  He carried out an analysis of public opinion polls about the Iraq war and attitudes towards war casualties . Dr. Feaver concluded from his study that US public opinion will support military engagement abroad, despite growing casualities, provided that the public believed that the war was being faught for a worthy cause and that victory was achievable.
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Original:  He carried out an analysis of public opinion polls about the Iraq war and public tolerance for US casualities in wars . Dr. Feaver concluded from his study that US public opinion will support military engagement abroad, despite growing casualities, provided that the public believed that the war was being faught for a worthy cause and that victory was achievable.
Revised:  He carried out an analysis of public opinion polls about the Iraq war and public tolerance for US casualities in wars . Dr. Feaver found that US public opinion will support military engagement abroad, despite growing casualities, provided that the public believed that the war was being faught for a worthy cause and that victory was achievable.
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Original:  He carried out an analysis of public opinion polls about the Iraq war and public tolerance for US casualities in wars . Dr. Feaver concluded from his study that US public opinion will support military engagement abroad, despite growing casualities, provided that the public believed that the war was being faught for a worthy cause and that victory was achievable.
Revised:  He carried out an analysis of public opinion polls about the Iraq war and public tolerance for US casualities in wars . Dr. Feaver concluded from his study that US public opinion will support military engagement abroad, despite growing casualities, provided that the public believed that the war was being fought for a worthy cause and that victory was achievable.
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Original:  On Friday, Lt. Gen. Martin Dempsey, the commander of the Multinational Security Transition Command in Iraq told reporters that he had seen the strategy document for the first time when it was released to the public.
Revised:  On Friday, Lt. Gen. Martin Dempsey, whose Multinational Security Transition Command in Iraq told reporters that he had seen the strategy document for the first time when it was released to the public.
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Original:  Peter Pace, the chairman of the Joint Chiefs of Staff  has said that he had read and critiqued the document on several occasions.
Revised:  Peter Pace, the chairman of the Joint Chiefs of Staff , has said that he had read and critiqued the document on several occasions.
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Original:  Earlier, replying to questions about the President's strategy, White House press secretary Scott McCellen said that the document was an "inter-agency document" and an "unclassified version" of the administrations "strategy for victory in Iraq" published for the public to view.
Revised:  Earlier, replying to questions about the President's strategy, White House press secretary Scott McClellan said that the document was an "inter-agency document" and an "unclassified version" of the administrations "strategy for victory in Iraq" published for the public to view.
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Original: Dr. Feaver was one of the people who helped " concieve and draft" the document, according to a White House staffer, who said that Meghan L. O'Sullivan, the deputy national security adviser for Iraq and Afghanistan, and her staff played a larger role.
Revised: Dr. Feaver was one of the people who helped " conceive and draft" the document, according to a White House staffer, who said that Meghan L. O'Sullivan, the deputy national security adviser for Iraq and Afghanistan, and her staff played a larger role.
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Original:  Dr. Feaver found that US public opinion will support military engagement abroad, despite growing casualities , provided that the public believed that the war was being fought for a worthy cause and that victory was achievable.
Revised:  Dr. Feaver found that US public opinion will support military engagement abroad, despite growing casualties , provided that the public believed that the war was being fought for a worthy cause and that victory was achievable.
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Original: Turkish daily newspaper SABAH reported that the leader of Ansar El Islam group( Soldiers of God)
Revised: Turkisy daily newspaper Sabah reported that the leader of Ansar El Islam group( Soldiers of God)
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Original: Turkish daily newspaper SABAH reported that the leader of Ansar El Islam group( Soldiers of God)
Revised: Turkish daily newspaper SABAH reported that the leader of Ansar El islam group( Soldiers of God)
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Original:  claimed that prior to the NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul , " he was interrogated by three foreigners and beaten . " On 29 April 2004, before the NATO Summit, which was to be held in June in Istanbul, Alpaslan Toprak, who is claimed to be the Turkish representative of Ansar El Islam, and 15 others were detained by the police after being given information by the CIA . Toprak was separated from others in his group.
Revised:  claimed that prior to NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul , " he was interrogated by three foreigners and beaten . " On 29 April 2004, before the NATO Summit, which was to be held in June in Istanbul, Alpaslan Toprak, who is claimed to be the Turkish representative of Ansar El Islam, and 15 others were detained by the police after being given information by the CIA . Toprak was separated from others in his group.
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Original:  claimed that prior to the NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul , " he was interrogated by three foreigners and beaten . " On 29 April 2004, before the NATO Summit, which was to be held in June in Istanbul, Alpaslan Toprak, who is claimed to be the Turkish representative of Ansar El Islam, and 15 others were detained by the police after being given information by the CIA . Toprak was separated from others in his group.
Revised:  claimed that prior to the NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul " he was interrogated by three foreigners and beaten . " On 29 April 2004, before the NATO Summit, which was to be held in June in Istanbul, Alpaslan Toprak, who is claimed to be the Turkish representative of Ansar El Islam, and 15 others were detained by the police after being given information by the CIA . Toprak was separated from others in his group.
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Original:  claimed that prior to the NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul , " he was interrogated by three foreigners and beaten . " On 29 April 2004, before the NATO Summit, which was to be held in June in Istanbul, Alpaslan Toprak, who is claimed to be the Turkish representative of Ansar El Islam, and 15 others were detained by the police after being given information by the CIA . Toprak was separated from others in his group.
Revised:  claimed that prior to the NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul , " he was interrogated by 3 foreigners and beaten . " On 29 April 2004, before the NATO Summit, which was to be held in June in Istanbul, Alpaslan Toprak, who is claimed to be the Turkish representative of Ansar El Islam, and 15 others were detained by the police after being given information by the CIA . Toprak was separated from others in his group.
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Original:  claimed that prior to the NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul , " he was interrogated by three foreigners and beaten . " On 29 April 2004, before the NATO Summit, which was to be held in June in Istanbul, Alpaslan Toprak, who is claimed to be the Turkish representative of Ansar El Islam, and 15 others were detained by the police after being given information by the CIA . Toprak was separated from others in his group.
Revised:  claimed that prior to the NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul , " he was interrogated by three foreigners and beaten " On 29 April 2004, before the NATO Summit, which was to be held in June in Istanbul, Alpaslan Toprak, who is claimed to be the Turkish representative of Ansar El Islam, and 15 others were detained by the police after being given information by the CIA . Toprak was separated from others in his group.
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Original:  claimed that prior to the NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul , " he was interrogated by three foreigners and beaten . " On 29 April 2004, before the NATO Summit, which was to be held in June in Istanbul, Alpaslan Toprak, who is claimed to be the Turkish representative of Ansar El Islam, and 15 others were detained by the police after being given information by the CIA . Toprak was separated from others in his group.
Revised:  claimed that prior to the NATO summit in 2004 in Istanbul , " he was interrogated by three foreigners and beaten . " On 29 Toprak was separated from others in his group.
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Original:  His allegations were included in his court statement, dated  12 May 2005.
Revised:  His allegations were included in his court statement, dated 12 
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Original:  He is believed to have become the network ’ s operational commander after the capture of Abu Farraj al-Libbi in Pakistan in May.
Revised:  He is believed to have become the network ' s operational commander after the capture of Abu Farraj al-Libbi in Pakistan in May.
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Original:  It was Shabana's second World Title in three years, as the  Egyptian also won in 2003.
Revised:  It was Shabana's second World Title in three years, as the w: Egyptian also won in 2003.
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Original:  Shabana beat Australian David Palmer 11/6,11/7,11/8 in 40 minutes , and David defeated Number 1 seed Rachel Grinham, of Australia 8/10,9/2,9/6,9/7 in 53 minutes, to take the titles . Shabana is currently ranked number 5 in the world, and will likely move into the top 3 next month, as neither the World #1 (Theirry Lincou), or number 2 (James Willstrop) reached the final.
Revised:  Shabana beat Australian David Palmer 11/6,11/7,11/8 in 40 minutes . Shabana is currently ranked number 5 in the world, and will likely move into the top 3 next month, as neither the World #1 (Theirry Lincou), or number 2 (James Willstrop) reached the final.
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Original:  (3) Nicol David (Malaysia) def. ( 1 ) Rachel Grinham(Australia ) 8/10  9/2  9/6  9/7 in 53 min
Revised:  (3) Nicol David (Malaysia) def. ( 1 ) Rachel Grinham(Australia ) 8/10 , 9/2 9/6 9/7 in 53 min
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Original:  (3) Nicol David (Malaysia) def. ( 1 ) Rachel Grinham(Australia ) 8/10  9/2  9/6  9/7 in 53 min
Revised:  (3) Nicol David (Malaysia) def. ( 1 ) Rachel Grinham(Australia ) 8/10 9/2 9/6 , 9/7 in 53 min
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Original:  An outspoken former national soccer champion, Mr. Hassan Naeb Agha, who is an active member of the opposition, claims to have been approached by family members under influence of Iran Ministry of Intelligence (MOIS) in a psychological warfare in an attempt to penetrate his personal life to stop his activities . ... wrap up the news article ..
Revised:  An outspoken former national soccer champion, Mr. Hassan Naeb Agha, who is an active member of the opposition, claims to have been approached by family members under influence of Iran Ministry of Intelligence (MOIS) in a psychological warfare in an attempt to penetrate his personal life to stop his activities ... wrap up the news article ..
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Original:  An outspoken former national soccer champion, Mr. Hassan Naeb Agha, who is an active member of the opposition, claims to have been approached by family members under influence of Iran Ministry of Intelligence (MOIS) in a psychological warfare in an attempt to penetrate his personal life to stop his activities . ... wrap up the news article ..
Revised:  An outspoken former national soccer champion, Mr. Hassan Naeb Agha, who is an active member of the opposition, claims to have been approached by family members under influence of Iran Ministry of Intelligence (MOIS) in a psychological warfare in an attempt to penetrate his personal life to stop his activities . 
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Original:  An outspoken former national soccer champion, Mr. Hassan Naeb Agha, who is an active member of the opposition, claims to have been approached by family members under influence of Iran Ministry of Intelligence (MOIS) in a psychological warfare in an attempt to penetrate his personal life to stop his activities  
Revised:  An outspoken former national soccer champion, Mr. Hassan Naeb Agha, who is an active member of the opposition, claims to have been approached by family members under influence of Iran Ministry of Intelligence (MOIS) in a psychological warfare in an attempt to penetrate his personal life to stop his activities . 
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Original: Long time Islamic Republic's rival, their main opposition group Mujahedin-e-Khalq , has been contributing greatly to bring the nuclear issue on the table alerting the world .
Revised: The Islamic Republic's rival, their main opposition group Mujahedin-e-Khalq , has been contributing greatly to bring the nuclear issue on the table alerting the world .
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Original: Long time Islamic Republic's rival, their main opposition group Mujahedin-e-Khalq , has been contributing greatly to bring the nuclear issue on the table alerting the world .
Revised: Long time Islamic Republic's long time main opposition group Mujahedin-e-Khalq , has been contributing greatly to bring the nuclear issue on the table alerting the world .
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Original: Long time Islamic Republic's rival, their main opposition group Mujahedin-e-Khalq , has been contributing greatly to bring the nuclear issue on the table alerting the world .
Revised: Long time Islamic Republic's rival, their main opposition group Mujahedin-e-Khalq has been bringing the nuclear issue on the table alerting the world .
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Original: Long time Islamic Republic's rival, their main opposition group Mujahedin-e-Khalq , has been contributing greatly to bring the nuclear issue on the table alerting the world .
Revised: Long time Islamic Republic's rival, their main opposition group Mujahedin-e-Khalq , has been contributing greatly to bring the nuclear issue to the world's attention .
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Original:  Three years past since then, new evidence evolving each month has created more suspicions about what Iran claims to be a peaceful project for civilian use.
Revised:  Three years since then, new evidence evolving each month has created more suspicions about what Iran claims to be a peaceful project for civilian use.
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Original:  Three years past since then, new evidence evolving each month has created more suspicions about what Iran claims to be a peaceful project for civilian use.
Revised:  Three years past since then, new evidence emerging each month has created more suspicions about what Iran claims to be a peaceful project for civilian use.
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Original:  Driven by increasing pressure from the European allies who have backed up from talks,  Islamic republic has hyped up their global campaign to discredit their opposition group . Some policy makers who offered to put the Iranian opposition in the list of terrorist organizations now repent from their past policy.
Revised:  Driven by increasing pressure from the European allies who have backed down from talks, Islamic republic has hyped up their global campaign to discredit their opposition group . Some policy makers who offered to put the Iranian opposition in the list of terrorist organizations now repent from their past policy.
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Original:  Driven by increasing pressure from the European allies who have backed up from talks,  Islamic republic has hyped up their global campaign to discredit their opposition group . Some policy makers who offered to put the Iranian opposition in the list of terrorist organizations now repent from their past policy.
Revised:  Driven by increasing pressure from the European allies who have backed up from talks, the Islamic republic has hyped up their global campaign to discredit their opposition group . Some policy makers who offered to put the Iranian opposition in the list of terrorist organizations now repent from their past policy.
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Original:  The Lord Alton of Liverpool, A lawmaker from the British house of Lords, in a symposium in the Parliament said;
Revised:  Lord Alton of Liverpool, A lawmaker from the British house of Lords, in a symposium in the Parliament said;
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Original:  The Lord Alton of Liverpool, A lawmaker from the British house of Lords, in a symposium in the Parliament said;
Revised:  The Lord Alton of Liverpool, a lawmaker from the British house of Lords, in a symposium in the Parliament said;
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Original:  The Lord Alton of Liverpool, A lawmaker from the British house of Lords, in a symposium in the Parliament said;
Revised:  The Lord Alton of Liverpool, A lawmaker from the British House of Lords, in a symposium in the Parliament said;
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Original:  The Lord Alton of Liverpool, A lawmaker from the British house of Lords, in a symposium in the Parliament said;
Revised:  The Lord Alton of Liverpool, A lawmaker from the British house of Lords, in a symposium in Parliament said,
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Original:  The new campaign has concerned Iranian dissidents in abroad.
Revised:  The new campaign has concerned Iranian dissidents abroad.
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Original:  An outspoken former national soccer champion, Mr. Hassan Naeb Agha, who is an active member of the opposition, claims to have been approached by family members under influence of Iran Ministry of Intelligence (MOIS) in a psychological warfare in an attempt to penetrate his personal life to stop his activities
Revised:  An outspoken former national soccer champion, Mr. Hassan Naeb Agha, an active member of the opposition, claims to have been approached by family members under influence of Iran Ministry of Intelligence (MOIS) in a psychological warfare in an attempt to penetrate his personal life to stop his activities
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Original:   Lord Alton of Liverpool, a lawmaker from the British House of Lords,  in a symposium in Parliament said , "Having been involved with the activities of the Iranian Resistance over this 25 years, I have learned a great deal about that misinformation campaign and the attempts by the Iranian regime to discredit the PMOI ( a.k.a.
Revised:  Lord Alton of Liverpool, a lawmaker from the British House of Lords, in a symposium in the House of Lords , "Having been involved with the activities of the Iranian Resistance over this 25 years, I have learned a great deal about that misinformation campaign and the attempts by the Iranian regime to discredit the PMOI ( a.k.a.
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Original:  People's Mojahedin Organization of Iran)” . 
Revised:  People's Mojahedin Organization of Iran)” . "
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Original: In a press conference in Washington, on August 2002, the Mujahedin-e-Khalq revealed Iran's secret nuclear plan for the first time shocking the western intelligence communities.
Revised: In a press conference in Washington, in August 2002, the Mujahedin-e-Khalq revealed Iran's secret nuclear plan for the first time shocking the western intelligence communities.
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