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Original:  In the air, 4 Boeing 747 supertanker , 1 McDonnell Douglas DC-10 tanker, and 6 modified Sikorsky UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters known as "Firehawks" have been dropping water and red Phos-Chek slurry.
Revised:  In the air, 4 Boeing 747 supertankers , 1 McDonnell Douglas DC-10 tanker, and 6 modified Sikorsky UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters known as "Firehawks" have been dropping water and red Phos-Chek slurry.
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Original:  however, the hot weather and high winds today could cause the flames to reappear.
Revised:  however, the hot weather and high winds could cause the flames to reappear.
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Original:  In the air, 4 Boeing 747 supertankers , 1 McDonnell Douglas DC-10 tanker, and 6 modified Sikorsky UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters known as "Firehawks" have been dropping water and red Phos-Chek slurry.
Revised:  In the air, 1 Boeing 747 supertankers , 1 McDonnell Douglas DC-10 tanker, and 6 modified Sikorsky UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters known as "Firehawks" have been dropping water and red Phos-Chek slurry.
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Original:  In the air, 4 Boeing 747 supertankers , 1 McDonnell Douglas DC-10 tanker, and 6 modified Sikorsky UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters known as "Firehawks" have been dropping water and red Phos-Chek slurry.
Revised:  In the air, 4 Boeing 747 supertanker , 1 McDonnell Douglas DC-10 tanker, and 6 modified Sikorsky UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters known as "Firehawks" have been dropping water and red Phos-Chek slurry.
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Original:  In the air, 1 Boeing 747 supertanker , 1 McDonnell Douglas DC-10 tanker, and 6 modified Sikorsky UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters known as "Firehawks" have been dropping water and red Phos-Chek slurry.
Revised:  In the air, 1 Boeing 747 supertankers , 1 McDonnell Douglas DC-10 tanker, and 6 modified Sikorsky UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters known as "Firehawks" have been dropping water and red Phos-Chek slurry.
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Original:  The extravagant ceremony occurred in Rhinebeck, New York amidst a flurry of secrecy and speculation surrounding the event  
Revised:  The extravagant ceremony occurred in Rhinebeck, New York amidst a flurry of secrecy and speculation surrounding the event . 
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Original:  The secluded mansion is situated on 50 acres (20.2 hectares) of land in the small town of Rhinebeck   
Revised:  The secluded mansion is situated on 50 acres (20.2 hectares) of land in the small town of Rhinebeck . 
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Original:  &  Chelsea Clinton and Marc Mezvinsky first met in Washington, D.C. while teenagers, and both later attended Stanford University.
Revised:  & Chelsea." Chelsea Clinton and Marc Mezvinsky first met in Washington, D.C. while teenagers, and both later attended Stanford University.
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Original:    Chelsea Clinton and  Marc Mezvinsky first met in Washington, D.C. while teenagers, and both later attended Stanford University.
Revised:  30-year-old Chelsea Clinton and Marc Mezvinsky first met in Washington, D.C. while teenagers, and both later attended Stanford University.
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Original:  Mezvinsky is the son of the now-divorced Marjorie Margolies-Mezvinsky and Ed Mezvinsky, friends of the Clinton family  
Revised:  Mezvinsky is the son of the now-divorced Marjorie Margolies-Mezvinsky and Ed Mezvinsky, friends of the Clinton family . 
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Original:  The extravagant ceremony occurred in Rhinebeck, New York amidst a flurry of secrecy and speculation surrounding the event.
Revised:  The ceremony occurred in Rhinebeck, New York amidst a flurry of secrecy and speculation surrounding the event.
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Original: Chelsea Clinton speaking at a 2008 event in Wisconsin Chelsea Clinton , the only daughter of former US William Jefferson "Bill" Clinton and current US Hillary Rodham Clinton, wed long-time boyfriend and investment banker on Saturday evening.
Revised: Chelsea Clinton , the only daughter of former US William Jefferson "Bill" Clinton and current US Hillary Rodham Clinton, wed long-time boyfriend and investment banker on Saturday evening.
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Original: The Irish government is warning of the long-term effects of such a calamity, and is stressing the urgency of parliamentary legislation to rectify the situation.
Revised: The Irish government is stressing the urgency of parliamentary legislation to rectify the situation.
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Original:  Not only is the welfare of individuals taking advantage of the temporary legality of the substances involved of concern, so too are drug-related convictions handed down since the now-unconstitutional changes came into effect.
Revised:  Not only is the welfare of individuals taking advantage of the temporary legality of the substances involved , and for drug-related convictions handed down since the now-unconstitutional changes came into effect.
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Original:  Various hard drugs — including , , and became rendered as legal, following the law governing their prohibition being found to be unconstitutional.
Revised:  Various hard drugs — including , , and — were rendered legal, following the law governing their prohibition being found to be unconstitutional.
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Original:  Moe and Sale need to win both  games and have other results go their way to make the finals.
Revised:  Moe and Sale need to win both of their reamaining games and have other results go their way to make the finals.
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Original:  Reserve grade side pictured here at last years Second Semi Final in SaleTwo ganes of the Gippsland football League round 16  split round over the weekend.
Revised:  Reserve grade side pictured here at last year's second semifinal in Sale. Two games of round 16 split round over the weekend.
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Original:  Reserve grade side pictured here at last years Second Semi Final in SaleTwo ganes of the Gippsland football League round 16  split round over the weekend.
Revised:  Reserve grade side pictured here at last years Second Semi Final in SaleTwo ganes of the Gippsland football League round 16 of the Gippsland Football League split round over the weekend.
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Original:  On Saturday, Sale defeated Moe by 75 points, while on Sunday, Drouin hosted Warragul .
Revised:  On Saturday, Sale defeated Moe by 75 points, while on Sunday, Warragul lost to Drouin .
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Original:  The split round will be completed next weekend with Leongatha travelling to Maffra and Morwell travelling to Wonthaggi.
Revised:  The split round will be completed next weekend with Leongatha traveling to Maffra and Morwell travelling to Wonthaggi.
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Original:  Moe and Sale need to win both of their reamaining games and have other results go their way to make the finals.
Revised:  Moe and Sale need to win both of their remaining games and have other results go their way to make the finals.
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Original:  The Gippsland Football League, officcially the Gippsland League, is the only major Australian rules football competition in the rural region east from Melbourne to the New South Wales border, according to the Victorian Country Football League.
Revised:  The Gippsland Football League, officially the Gippsland League, is the only major Australian rules football competition in the rural region east from Melbourne to the New South Wales border, according to the Victorian Country Football League.
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Original:  A nine goal second quarter lead to a 75 point win for Sale at home over Moe.
Revised:  A nine-goal second quarter lead to a 75 point win for Sale at home over Moe.
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Original:  A four goal third quarter from both the hosts and Moe saw Sale's lead increase by only 2 points.
Revised:  A four-goal third quarter from both the hosts and Moe saw Sale's lead increase by only 2 points.
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Original:  Sale kicked five goals , six behinds to Moe's two goals , two behinds in the final quarter to run out winners  23-20 (153) to 12-11 (83).
Revised:  Sale kicked five goals and six behinds to Moe's two goals , two behinds in the final quarter to run out winners 23-20 (153) to 12-11 (83).
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Original:  Sale kicked five goals , six behinds to Moe's two goals , two behinds in the final quarter to run out winners  23-20 (153) to 12-11 (83).
Revised:  Sale kicked five goals , six behinds to Moe's two goals , two behinds in the final quarter to run out winners , 23-20 (153) to 12-11 (83).
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Original:  He snapped.  
Revised:  He snapped. " 
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Original:  He snapped.  
Revised:  He snapped. However a source close to the suspended presenter defended him saying "he didn't punch anyone"
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Original:  The BBC will be making no further comment at this time.  
Revised:  The BBC will be making no further comment at this time. " 
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Original:  He also caused offence with comments he made about India and Mexico as well as comments about people with special needs  
Revised:  He also caused offence with comments he made about India and Mexico as well as comments about people with special needs . 
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Original: 175px|Clarkson is one of the presenters of motoring programme '' Jeremy Clarkson , a presenter who works on the BBC motoring programme 'Top Gear' has been suspended by the corporation.
Revised: 175px|Clarkson is one of the presenters of motoring programme '' , a presenter who works on the BBC motoring programme 'Top Gear' has been suspended by the corporation.
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Original: 175px|Clarkson is one of the presenters of motoring programme '' Jeremy Clarkson , a presenter who works on the BBC motoring programme 'Top Gear' has been suspended by the corporation.
Revised: 175px|Clarkson is one of the presenters of motoring programme '' Jeremy Clarkson , a presenter who works on the BBC motoring programme '' has been suspended by the corporation.
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Original:  After filming had finished in Newcastle , it is believed that Clarkson, 54 punched 36-year-old producer Oisin Tymon over a lack of catering available.
Revised:  After filming had finished in , it is believed that Clarkson, 54 punched 36-year-old producer Oisin Tymon over a lack of catering available.
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Original:  A source spoke to the British newspaper The Mirror about the incident.
Revised:  A source spoke to the British newspaper The about the incident.
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Original:  Clarkson has presented the show since 2002 and co-hosts alogn side Richard Hammond and James May .
Revised:  Clarkson has presented the show since 2002 and co-hosts along side and .
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Original:  He is one of the BBC's highest paid stars  
Revised:  He is one of the BBC's highest paid stars . 
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Original: 175px|Clarkson is one of the presenters of motoring programme '' , a presenter who works on the BBC motoring programme '' has been suspended by the corporation.
Revised: 175px|Clarkson is one of the presenters of motoring programme '' , one of the presenters on the 's motoring programme '' has been suspended by the corporation.
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Original:  Clarkson, who has caused controversy several times before , was suspended on Tuesday after allegedly 'punching' a producer last week.
Revised:  Clarkson, responsible for several prior controversies , was suspended on Tuesday after allegedly 'punching' a producer last week.
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Original:  Clarkson, who has caused controversy several times before , was suspended on Tuesday after allegedly 'punching' a producer last week.
Revised:  Clarkson, who has caused controversy several times before , was suspended Tuesday, after allegedly 'punching' a producer last week.
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Original:  The next two episodes of 'Top Gear' have been pulled from broadcast, with a third , the season finale , also likely to not be shown.
Revised:  The next two episodes of 'Top Gear' have been pulled from broadcast, with a third — the season finale , also likely to not be shown.
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Original:  The next two episodes of 'Top Gear' have been pulled from broadcast, with a third , the season finale , also likely to not be shown.
Revised:  The next two episodes of 'Top Gear' have been pulled from broadcast, with a third , the season finale — also unlikely to be shown.
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Original:  The incident that caused Clarkson's suspension reportedly occurred after an argument with a producer last week .
Revised:  The incident leading to Clarkson's suspension reportedly occurred after an argument with a producer last week .
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Original:  The incident that caused Clarkson's suspension reportedly occurred after an argument with a producer last week .
Revised:  The incident that caused Clarkson's suspension reportedly occurred after an argument with a producer .
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Original:  After filming had finished in , it is believed that Clarkson, 54 punched 36-year-old producer Oisin Tymon over a lack of catering available .
Revised:  After filming had finished in , it is believed Clarkson, 54 punched 36-year-old producer Oisin Tymon over a lack of catering available .
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Original:  After filming had finished in , it is believed that Clarkson, 54 punched 36-year-old producer Oisin Tymon over a lack of catering available .
Revised:  After filming had finished in , it is believed that Clarkson, 54 punched 36-year-old producer Oisin Tymon over a lack of catering availability .
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Original:  They said  "They came to the end of filming after a long day and Jeremy discovered that no food had been laid on.
Revised:  They said , "They came to the end of filming after a long day and Jeremy discovered that no food had been laid on.
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Original:  He snapped." 'Top Gear' is a motoring programme that is shown on BBC Two in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  He snapped." 'Top Gear' is a motoring programme shown on BBC Two in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Clarkson has presented the show since 2002 and co-hosts along side and .
Revised:  Clarkson has presented the show since 2002 , co-hosting alongside and .
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Original: 175px|Clarkson is one of the presenters of motoring programme '' , one of the presenters on the  's motoring programme '' has been suspended by the corporation.
Revised: 175px|Clarkson is one of the presenters of motoring programme '' , one of the presenters on the BBC 's motoring programme '' has been suspended by the corporation.
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Original:  Unofficial Top-10 Race Results for the 2010 Sunoco Red Cross Pennsylvania 500 Position Car Number Driver 1 16 Greg Biffle 2 14 Tony Stewart 3 99 Carl Edwards 4 29 Kevin Harvick 5 11 Denny Hamlin 6 24 Jeff Gordon 7 5 Mark Martin 8 31 Jeff Burton 9 56 Martin Truex, Jr. 10 48 Jimmie Johnson --> Category:United States Category:North America Category:NASCAR Category:Pennsylvania Category:Auto raci
Revised:  Unofficial Top-10 Race Results for the 2010 Sunoco Red Cross Pennsylvania 500 Position Car Number Driver 1 16 Greg Biffle 2 14 Tony Stewart 3 99 Carl Edwards 4 29 Kevin Harvick 5 11 Denny Hamlin 6 24 Jeff Gordon 7 5 Mark Martin 8 31 Jeff Burton 9 56 Martin Truex, Jr. 10 48 Jimmie Johnso
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Original: In the point standings, Harvick and Gordon remained in the first and second position . and Hamlin maintained the third position as Johnson kept fourth.
Revised: In the point standings, Harvick and Gordon remained in the first and second position and Hamlin maintained the third position as Johnson kept fourth.
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Original: On Monday, the Ministry of Defence made the announcement that two UK military workers have died in Helmand Province, Afghanistan, as the result of two isolated occurrences on Sunday . Small arms fire was the cause of the death of a soldier, who came from the 1st Battalion Scots Guards, in the Lashkargah District.
Revised: On Monday, the Ministry of Defence announced that two UK military workers have died in Helmand Province, Afghanistan, as the result of two isolated occurrences on Sunday . Small arms fire was the cause of the death of a soldier, who came from the 1st Battalion Scots Guards, in the Lashkargah District.
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Original: On Monday, the Ministry of Defence made the announcement that two UK military workers have died in Helmand Province, Afghanistan, as the result of two isolated occurrences on Sunday . Small arms fire was the cause of the death of a soldier, who came from the 1st Battalion Scots Guards, in the Lashkargah District.
Revised: On Monday, the Ministry of Defence made the announcement that two UK military workers died in Helmand Province, Afghanistan, as the result of two isolated occurrences on Sunday . Small arms fire was the cause of the death of a soldier, who came from the 1st Battalion Scots Guards, in the Lashkargah District.
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Original:  These incidents have caused the total number of UK military deaths in Afghanistan since October 2001 to rise up to 327.
Revised:  These incidents have caused the total number of UK military deaths in Afghanistan since October 2001 to rise to 327.
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Original:  His sacrifice will not be forgotten.  
Revised:  His sacrifice will not be forgotten. " 
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Original: These incidents have caused the total number of UK military deaths in Afghanistan since October 2001 to rise to 327.
Revised: Including these new deaths, the total number of UK military deaths in Afghanistan since October 2001 to rise to 327.
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Original: These incidents have caused the total number of UK military deaths in Afghanistan since October 2001 to rise to 327.
Revised: These incidents have caused the total number of UK military deaths in Afghanistan has rose to 327.
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Original:  The cause of death for the other individual, who was working as a Royal Marine within 40 Commando, was in the Sangin District, when the explosion of an improvised explosive device  occurred.
Revised:  The cause of death for the other individual, who was working as a Royal Marine within 40 Commando, was in the Sangin District, when the explosion of an improvised explosive device (IED) occurred.
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Original:  Small arms fire killed one soldier, who came from the 1st Battalion Scots Guards  in the Lashkargah District.
Revised:  Small arms fire killed one soldier, who came from the 1st Battalion Scots Guards , in the Lashkargah District.
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Original:  The other individual, who was working as a Royal Marine within 40 Commando, was in the Sangin District when the explosion of an improvised explosive device (IED) occurred.
Revised:  The other individual, a Royal Marine within 40 Commando, was in the Sangin District when the explosion of an improvised explosive device (IED) occurred.
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Original:  The other individual, who was working as a Royal Marine within 40 Commando, was in the Sangin District when the explosion of an improvised explosive device (IED) occurred.
Revised:  The other individual, who was working as a Royal Marine serving in 40 Commando, was in the Sangin District when the explosion of an improvised explosive device (IED) occurred.
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Original:  Including these new deaths, the total number of UK military deaths in Afghanistan has rose to 327.
Revised:  Including these new deaths, the total number of UK military deaths in Afghanistan rose to 327.
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Original:  Southall also stated about the Marine : "He gave his life whilst seeking to improve the lives of ordinary Afghans.
Revised:  Southall also stated about the marine : "He gave his life whilst seeking to improve the lives of ordinary Afghans.
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Original:   Task Force Helmand spokesman Lieutenant Colonel David Southall spoke of the first soldier 's " selfless courage and sacrifice".
Revised:  Task Force Helmand spokesman Lieutenant Colonel David Southall said of the first soldier 's " selfless courage and sacrifice".
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Original:   Task Force Helmand spokesman Lieutenant Colonel David Southall spoke of the first soldier 's " selfless courage and sacrifice".
Revised:  Task Force Helmand spokesman Lieutenant Colonel David Southall spoke of the first soldier , " selfless courage and sacrifice".
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Original:  Southall also stated about the marine: "He gave his life whilst seeking to improve the lives of ordinary Afghans.
Revised:  "He gave his life whilst seeking to improve the lives of ordinary Afghans.
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Original:  His sacrifice will not be forgotten . " 
Revised:  His sacrifice will not be forgotten , " 
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Original: Jurors in the Rod Blagojevich corruption trial began their fourth day of deliberations Monday morning , and recent notes they had sent out suggested that the discussions could take much longer.
Revised: Jurors in the Rod Blagojevich corruption trial conducted their fourth day of deliberations Monday morning , and recent notes they had sent out suggested that the discussions could take much longer.
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Original: Jurors in the Rod Blagojevich corruption trial began their fourth day of deliberations Monday morning , and recent notes they had sent out suggested that the discussions could take much longer.
Revised: Jurors in the Rod Blagojevich corruption trial began their fourth day of deliberations on Monday , and recent notes they had sent out suggested that the discussions could take much longer.
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Original:   After hitting some concrete on the line, train service on the Paddington to Exeter line was stopped around Bath.
Revised:  Train service on the Paddington to Exeter line was stopped around Bath.
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Original: Paddington Station A cork was temporarily used to fix a fuel leak on a British passenger train.
Revised:  A cork was temporarily used to fix a fuel leak on a British passenger train.
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Original: Five children have been killed by a suicide car bomb in the Kandahar province in southern Afghanistan on Monday.
Revised: Five children were killed by a suicide car bomb in the Kandahar province in southern Afghanistan on Monday.
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Original:  However, Nazak was not harmed .
Revised:  Nazak was unharmed .
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Original:  In another Gallup poll, just 36\% of poll respondents supported thw way Obama was handling Afghanistan, a sharp decline from 48\% in February.
Revised:  In another Gallup poll, just 36\% of poll respondents supported the way Obama was handling Afghanistan, a sharp decline from 48\% in February.
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Original:  The pastor also said, "Islam and Sharia law was responsible for 9/11." The book title is being marketed as a slogan that appears on hats, shirts and coffee mugs that can be purchased at a dot.com website with an address bearing the book's title.
Revised:  The book title is being marketed as a slogan that appears on hats, shirts and coffee mugs that can be purchased at a dot.com website with an address bearing the book's title.
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Original: A 17th century Quran in the Victoria and Albert Museum A Gainesville, Florida church named the Dove World Outreach Center has drawn international attention to itself with its planned book burning of the Quran .
Revised: A 17th century Qur'an in the Victoria and Albert Museum A Gainesville, Florida church named the Dove World Outreach Center has drawn international attention to itself with its planned book burning of the Quran .
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Original: A 17th century Quran in the Victoria and Albert Museum A Gainesville, Florida church named the Dove World Outreach Center has drawn international attention to itself with its planned book burning of the Quran .
Revised: A 17th century Quran in the Victoria and Albert Museum A Gainesville, Florida church named the Dove World Outreach Center has drawn international attention to itself with its planned book burning of the Qur'an .
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