wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  “ They went into the alleyways just north of the square chasing protesters and yelling 'you pimps, you infiltrators, you want freedom?
Revised:  " They went into the alleyways just north of the square chasing protesters and yelling 'you pimps, you infiltrators, you want freedom?
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Original:  we will give it to you' , " the source added.
Revised:  we will give it to you' . " the source added.
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Original:  we will give it to you' , " the source added.
Revised:  we will give it to you' , " 
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Original:  Al Jazeera correspondent  Amin said, "It seems from the people in Daraa that the government is seriously trying to contain [the situation in] Daraa because that is where it all started.
Revised:  Al Jazeera correspondent Rula Amin said, "It seems from the people in Daraa that the government is seriously trying to contain [the situation in] Daraa because that is where it all started.
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Original: Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard's plans to implement a Carbon Tax in Australia have hit a roadblock today with the national secretary of the Australian Workers Union Paul Howes demanding that exemptions be made to certain heavy polluting industries including steel production as well as concerns about whether jobs will be lost.
Revised: Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard's plans to implement a carbon tax in Australia have hit a roadblock today with the national secretary of the Australian Workers Union Paul Howes demanding that exemptions be made to certain heavy polluting industries including steel production as well as concerns about whether jobs will be lost.
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Original:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope said that 'The tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ' . Paul Howes has told The Australian newspaper that ' if one job is gone, our support is gone ' . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
Revised:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope , said that "the tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ' . Paul Howes has told The Australian newspaper that ' if one job is gone, our support is gone ' . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
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Original:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope said that 'The tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ' . Paul Howes has told The Australian newspaper that ' if one job is gone, our support is gone ' . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
Revised:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope said that 'The tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers " . Paul Howes has told The Australian newspaper that ' if one job is gone, our support is gone ' . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
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Original:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope said that 'The tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ' . Paul Howes has told The Australian newspaper that ' if one job is gone, our support is gone ' . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
Revised:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope said that 'The tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ' . Paul Howes told The Australian newspaper that ' if one job is gone, our support is gone ' . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
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Original:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope said that 'The tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ' . Paul Howes has told The Australian newspaper that ' if one job is gone, our support is gone ' . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
Revised:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope said that 'The tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ' . Paul Howes has told The Australian newspaper that " if one job is gone, our support is gone ' . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
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Original:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope said that 'The tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ' . Paul Howes has told The Australian newspaper that ' if one job is gone, our support is gone ' . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
Revised:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope said that 'The tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ' . Paul Howes has told The Australian newspaper that ' if one job is gone, our support is gone " . Mr Howes is a powerful figure within the Australian Labor Party who is believe to be instrumental with the removal of PM Gillard's predecessor Kevin Rudd.
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Original:  Support for the Gillard Labor Government has dropped to an all time low earlier this year  with only a 30\% approval rating.
Revised:  Support for the Gillard Labor Government has dropped to an all time low earlier this year , with only a 30\% approval rating.
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Original:  The move by the AWU has been supported by other unions in Australia  including the Transport Workers Union as well as Opposition Leader Tony Abbott
Revised:  The move by the AWU has been supported by other unions in Australia , including the Transport Workers Union as well as Opposition Leader Tony Abbott
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Original:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope, said that "the tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ". Paul Howes told The Australian newspaper that "if one job is gone, our support is gone ".
Revised:  Paul O'Malley, managing director and Chief Executive of BlueScope, said that "the tax threat is still real for the Australian Steel industry and for our customers ." Paul Howes told The Australian newspaper that "if one job is gone, our support is gone ".
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Original:  Advocates believe that the recent sex scandal to rock Duntroon could result in 'hundreds' of other victims coming forwar   
Revised:  Advocates believe that the recent sex scandal to rock Duntroon could result in 'hundreds' of other victims coming forward. 
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Original: The Australian Defence Force could face a class-action lawsuit in light of recent allegations of a male cadet broadcasting himself having sex with a female cadet  at the Australian military college at Duntroon.
Revised: The Australian Defence Force could face a class-action lawsuit in light of recent allegations of a male cadet broadcasting himself having sex with a female cadet at the Australian military college Duntroon.
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Original:  Senator Nick Xenophon has called on the Foreign Minister Stephen Smith to make inquires into the sexual nature of the ADF a priority of the government.
Revised:  Senator Nick Xenophon has called on Foreign Minister Stephen Smith to make inquires into the sexual nature of the ADF a priority of the government.
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Original:  The VVA can be contacted on +61  8232 942
Revised:  The VVA can be contacted on +61 8 8232 942
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Original: The Australian Defence Force could face a class-action lawsuit in light of recent allegations of a male cadet broadcasting himself having sex with a female cadet to six other cadets at the Australian military college Duntroon.
Revised: The could face a class-action lawsuit in light of recent allegations of a male cadet broadcasting himself having sex with a female cadet to six other cadets at the Australian military college Duntroon.
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Original:  Senator Nick Xenophon has called on Foreign Minister Stephen Smith to make inquires into the sexual nature of the ADF a priority of the government.
Revised:  Senator has called on Foreign Minister Stephen Smith to make inquires into the sexual nature of the ADF a priority of the government.
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Original:  Senator Nick Xenophon has called on Foreign Minister Stephen Smith to make inquires into the sexual nature of the ADF a priority of the government.
Revised:  Senator Nick Xenophon has called on Foreign Minister to make inquires into the sexual nature of the ADF a priority of the government.
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Original: Both the VVA and Mr Xenophon have called on other victims to come forward .
Revised: Both the VVA and Mr Xenophon have called on other victims to come forward 
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Original:  The VVA can be contacted on +61 8 8232 9422 (08 8232 9422
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Original: The could face a class-action lawsuit in light of recent allegations of a male cadet broadcasting himself having sex with a female cadet to six other cadets at the Australian military college Duntroon .
Revised: The could face a class-action lawsuit in light of recent allegations of a male cadet broadcasting himself having sex with a female cadet to six other cadets at the .
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Original:  Advocates believe that the recent sex scandal to rock Duntroon could result in 'hundreds' of other victims coming forward.
Revised:  Advocates believe that the recent sex scandal could result in 'hundreds' of other victims coming forward.
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Original:  Senator has called on Foreign Minister to make inquires into the sexual nature of the ADF a priority of the government.
Revised:  Senator has called on Foreign Minister to make inquires into the sexual nature of the ADFA a priority of the government.
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Original:  Mr  Xenophon is also considering a class action on behalf of all victims.
Revised:  Mr . Xenophon is also considering a class action on behalf of all victims.
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Original:  Both the VVA and Mr  Xenophon have called on other victims to come forward
Revised:  Both the VVA and Mr . Xenophon have called on other victims to come forward
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Original:  However, the US military does not call MK77 munitions "napalm" bombs.
Revised:  The US military does not call MK77 munitions "napalm" bombs.
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Original:  However, the use of MK77 firebombs against Iraqi troops  had a "strikingly similar" effect to napalm as confirmed in August 2003 by the US military representatives Col.
Revised:  However, the use of MK77 firebombs against Iraqi troops in 2003 had a "strikingly similar" effect to napalm as confirmed in August 2003 by the US military representatives Col.
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Original: The documentary also implies that US troops used MK77 incendiary bombs in Fallujah, which contain an upgraded napalm formulation.
Revised: The documentary also implies that US troops used Mark 77 incendiary bombs in Fallujah, which contain an upgraded napalm formulation.
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Original:  This corroborates the eyewitness testimony in the documentary claiming many civilains were killed in their homes by incendiary and caustic materials.
Revised:  This corroborates the eyewitness testimony in the documentary claiming many civilians were killed in their homes by incendiary and caustic materials.
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Original:  White phosphorus is is also a highly toxic substance with an average lethal dose (LD50) of 50 milligrams;
Revised:  White phosphorus is also a highly toxic substance with an average lethal dose (LD50) of 50 milligrams;
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Original:  People of Liberia, who have been experiencing the evil of a civic warfor over 14 years, are choosing their first post-war president from two candidates, Mrs. Ellen Johnson-Sirleaf and Mr. George Weah , who have recived most of votes in elections on October 11 , 2005.
Revised:  People of Liberia, who have been experiencing the evil of a civic warfor over 14 years, are choosing their first post-war president from two candidates, Mrs. Ellen Johnson-Sirleaf and Mr. George Weah , who have recived most of votes in elections on October 11 this year.
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Original: Mrs. Ellen Johnson-Sirleaf, 66-year-old former economist of World Bank and University of Harvard degree,  so called "Iron Lady", is very popular along educated people and women.
Revised: Mrs. Johnson-Sirleaf, 66-year-old former economist of World Bank and University of Harvard degree, so called "Iron Lady", is very popular along educated people and women.
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Original: Mrs. Ellen Johnson-Sirleaf, 66-year-old former economist of World Bank and University of Harvard degree,  so called "Iron Lady", is very popular along educated people and women.
Revised: Mrs. Ellen Johnson-Sirleaf, 66-year-old former economist of World Bank and University of Harvard degree, the so called "Iron Lady", is very popular along educated people and women.
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Original:  Additional, she is believed to be a better candidate , as she has got very good economical knowledge.
Revised:  She is believed to be a better candidate , as she has got very good economical knowledge.
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Original:  She 've been the runner-up to elections on October 11 , 2005, receiving about 20\% of votes.
Revised:  She 've been the runner-up in the October 11 , 2005, receiving about 20\% of votes.
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Original:  She 've been the runner-up to elections on October 11 , 2005, receiving about 20\% of votes.
Revised:  She 've been the runner-up to elections on October 11 elections, receiving about 20\% of votes.
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Original:   Mr. George Weah, 39-year-old well-known football player , former star of AC Milan, is said to be a successfull man.
Revised:  Mr. Weah, 39-year-old well-known football player , former star of AC Milan, is said to be a successfull man.
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Original:   Mr. George Weah, 39-year-old well-known football player , former star of AC Milan, is said to be a successfull man.
Revised:  Mr. George Weah, 39-year-old well-known football player and former star of AC Milan, is said to be a successfull man.
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Original:  His electorate is generally made up of young men - war combatants etc .
Revised:  His electorate is generally made up of young men - many of them war veterans .
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Original:  But his opponents say that he is an unexperienced man, who haven't got any political skills.
Revised:  But his opponents say that he is an inexperienced leader, without political skills.
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Original:  According to United Nations peacekeepers, there were not any incidents during the voting today.
Revised:  According to United Nations peacekeepers, there were no incidents during the voting today.
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Original: Mrs. Johnson-Sirleaf, 66-year-old former economist of  World Bank and University of Harvard degree , the so called "Iron Lady", is very popular along educated people and women.
Revised: Mrs. Johnson-Sirleaf, 66-year-old former economist of the World Bank and University of Harvard degree , the so called "Iron Lady", is very popular along educated people and women.
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Original: Mrs. Johnson-Sirleaf, 66-year-old former economist of  World Bank and University of Harvard degree , the so called "Iron Lady", is very popular along educated people and women.
Revised: Mrs. Johnson-Sirleaf, 66-year-old former economist of World Bank and Harvard University graduate , the so called "Iron Lady", is very popular along educated people and women.
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Original:  Opponents point to the fact she'd be the first woman leader ever in Africa, and that she does not have the support of rebel warlords who have led civil wars for the past 14 years .
Revised:  Opponents point to the fact she'd be the first woman leader ever in Africa, and that she does not have the support of the rebel warlords .
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Original:  In the aftermath of a 14-year long civil war, Liberians are holding elections for their first post-war president.
Revised: Flag of Liberia In the aftermath of a 14-year long civil war, Liberians are holding elections for their first post-war president.
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Original:  She is believed to be a better candidate due to her economics background.
Revised:  Her supporters consider her to be the better candidate due to her economics background.
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Original: Mr. Weah, 39-year-old well-known football player and former star of AC Milan, is said to be a successfull man.
Revised: Mr. Weah, 39-year-old well-known football player and former star of AC Milan, is said to be a successful man.
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Original:  His supporters, who call him "King George"  are generally made up of young men - many of them war veterans.
Revised:  His supporters, who call him "King George" , are generally made up of young men - many of them war veterans.
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Original:  Of the two final candidates — Ellen Johnson-Sirleaf and George Weah — Mr Weah had a higher percentage of the vote in run-off elections held on October 11 this year.
Revised:  Of the two final candidates — Ellen Johnson-Sirleaf and George Weah — Mr Weah had a higher percentage of the vote in elections held on October 11 this year.
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Original:  The , a representing controllers in the U.S., said the FAA had their "full support" in implementing the new steps to tackle fatigue  
Revised:  The , a representing controllers in the U.S., said the FAA had their "full support" in implementing the new steps to tackle fatigue . 
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Original: LaHood said controllers would be required to have a minimum of nine hours rest between shifts, an increase of an hour, and more supervisors would be required during night shifts, and they will be restricted in what shifts they can swap will colleagues.
Revised: LaHood said controllers would be required to have a minimum of nine hours rest between shifts, an increase of an hour, and more supervisors would be required during night shifts, and they will be restricted in what shifts they can swap with colleagues.
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Original: Kelvin Thomson, an Australian House of Representatives member, asked the Prime Minister of Australia November 8 at Question Time about the awarding of the $800,000 AUD printing contract of booklets explaining the new industrial relations legislation, to Salmat Ltd., who has been said to have donated $120, 000 to the Australian Liberal Party .
Revised: The Prime Minister of Australia November 8 at Question Time about the awarding of the $800,000 AUD printing contract of booklets explaining the new industrial relations legislation, to Salmat Ltd., who has been said to have donated $120, 000 to the Australian Liberal Party .
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Original:  It was revealed the week earlier that these booklets were "pulped" by w: Stephen Smith at a cost of $152,000 to the taxpayer.
Revised:  It was revealed the week earlier that these booklets were "pulped" by Stephen Smith at a cost of $152,000 to the taxpayer.
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Original:  Pole position winner, finished third, ahead of and in fourth and fifth. managed the sixth position ahead of in seventh. followed Biffle in eighth, while could only manage ninth. rounded out the top ten finishers in the race   
Revised:  Pole position winner, finished third, ahead of and in fourth and fifth. managed the sixth position ahead of in seventh. followed Biffle in eighth, while could only manage ninth. rounded out the top ten finishers in the race . 
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Original:  Following the race, Edwards remained leader with 295 points.
Revised: After doing his , Johnson said: "We were just the lucky guy at the end with a good run. We had some big mo on our side, and off we went." Johnson continued, "I can't thank Junior enough. He made the decision that my car was faster leading. And the way these things are finishing up, the lead car's going to get the win. In some respects, he was more worried about the team having a good performance than anything." Following the race, Edwards remained leader with 295 points.
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Original: File photo of Jimmie Johnson driver won his first race of the NASCAR season and his second career win at on Sunday during the at Talladega SuperSpeedway in , Alabama.
Revised: File photo of Jimmie Johnson driver won his first race of the NASCAR season and his second career win at on Sunday during the at Talladega Superspeedway in , Alabama.
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Original: File photo of Jimmie Johnson driver won his first race of the NASCAR season  and his second career win  at on Sunday during the at Talladega Superspeedway in , Alabama.
Revised: File photo of Jimmie Johnson driver won his first race of the NASCAR season , and his second career win at on Sunday during the at Talladega Superspeedway in , Alabama.
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Original: File photo of Jimmie Johnson driver won his first race of the NASCAR season  and his second career win  at on Sunday during the at Talladega Superspeedway in , Alabama.
Revised: File photo of Jimmie Johnson driver won his first race of the NASCAR season and his second career win , at on Sunday during the at Talladega Superspeedway in , Alabama.
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Original: File photo of Jimmie Johnson driver won his first race of the NASCAR season  and his second career win  at on Sunday during the at Talladega Superspeedway in , Alabama.
Revised: File photo of Jimmie Johnson driver won his first race of the NASCAR season and his second career win at on Sunday during the in Alabama.
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Original:  The conclusion tied the closest finish in series history , which occured at in 2003.
Revised:  The conclusion tied the closest finish in series history which occured at in 2003.
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Original:  Pole position winner, finished third, ahead of and in fourth and fifth. managed the sixth position ahead of in seventh. followed Biffle in eighth, while could only manage ninth. rounded out the top ten finishers in the race.
Revised:  Pole position winner, finished third, ahead of and in fourth and fifth. took sixth position ahead of in seventh. followed Biffle in eighth, while could only manage ninth. rounded out the top ten finishers in the race.
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Original:  Pole position winner, finished third, ahead of and in fourth and fifth. managed the sixth position ahead of in seventh. followed Biffle in eighth, while could only manage ninth. rounded out the top ten finishers in the race.
Revised:  Pole position winner, finished third, ahead of and in fourth and fifth. managed the sixth position ahead of in seventh. , , and rounded out the top ten finishers in the race.
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Original: Following the race, Edwards remained leader with 295 points.
Revised: Following the race, Edwards remains leader with 295 points.
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