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Original: Eliot Spitzer (D), Governor of New York According to a report by The New York Times (The Times), New York Governor Eliot Spitzer informed his senior administration officials on Monday that he patronized a "high-class" prostitution ring.
Revised: Eliot Spitzer (D), Governor of New York According to a report by The New York Times (The Times), New York Governor Eliot Spitzer informed his senior administration officials on Monday that he was being investigated for using a "high-class" prostitution ring.
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Original:  ABC News reported that  according to federal officials, the federal investigation into the prostitution ring was initially motivated by money transfers which led agents to believe Governor Spitzer was hiding bribes
Revised:  ABC News reported that , according to federal officials, the federal investigation into the prostitution ring was initially motivated by money transfers which led agents to believe Governor Spitzer was hiding bribes
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Original: Eliot Spitzer (D), Governor of New York According to a report by The New York Times (The Times), New York Governor Eliot Spitzer informed his senior administration officials on Monday that he was being investigated for using a "high-class" prostitution ring.
Revised: Eliot Spitzer (D), Governor of New York According to a report by The New York Times (The Times), New York Governor Eliot Shitzer informed his senior administration officials on Monday that he was being investigated for using a "high-class" prostitution ring.
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Original: Eliot Spitzer (D), Governor of New York According to a report by The New York Times (The Times), New York Governor Eliot Shitzer informed his senior administration officials on Monday that he was being investigated for using a "high-class" prostitution ring.
Revised: Eliot Spitzer (D), Governor of New York According to a report by The New York Times (The Times), New York Governor Eliot Spitzer informed his senior administration officials on Monday that he was being investigated for using a "high-class" prostitution ring.
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Original:  A law enforcement official who spoke to The Associated Press on condition of anonymity stated that a federal wiretap related to a recent investigation revealed that Spitzer paid for prostitutes from an online service under investigation.
Revised:  A law enforcement official who spoke to Associated Press on condition of anonymity stated that a federal wiretap related to a recent investigation revealed that Spitzer paid for prostitutes from an online service under investigation.
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Original: Following from accusations issued by the United States Senate Permanent Subcommittee on Investigations (PSI), the two politicians named in the report, British MP George Galloway and senator Charles Pasqua of France , have vehemently denied any wrongdoing.
Revised: Following from accusations issued by the United States Senate Permanent Subcommittee on Investigations (PSI), British Member of Parliament George Galloway and senator Charles Pasqua of France , have vehemently denied any wrongdoing.
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Original: Following from accusations issued by the United States Senate Permanent Subcommittee on Investigations (PSI), the two politicians named in the report, British MP George Galloway and senator Charles Pasqua of France , have vehemently denied any wrongdoing.
Revised: Following from accusations issued by the United States Senate Permanent Subcommittee on Investigations (PSI), the two politicians named in the report, British MP George Galloway and Senator Charles Pasqua of France , have vehemently denied any wrongdoing.
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Original: Following from accusations issued by the United States Senate Permanent Subcommittee on Investigations (PSI), the two politicians named in the report, British MP George Galloway and senator Charles Pasqua of France , have vehemently denied any wrongdoing.
Revised: Following from accusations issued by the United States Senate Permanent Subcommittee on Investigations (PSI), the two politicians named in the report, British MP George Galloway and senator Charles Pasqua of France have vehemently denied any wrongdoing.
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Original:   On May 17, Galloway appeared before the US senatorial panel and vehemently denied any wrongdoing in a tone seldom used in a senatorial hearing.
Revised:  On May 17, Galloway appeared before the U.S. senatorial panel and vehemently denied any wrongdoing in a tone seldom used in a senatorial hearing.
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Original:  He accused the US administration of creating a "smoke screen" to divert attention away from the situation in Iraq.
Revised:  He accused the U.S. administration of creating a "smoke screen" to divert attention away from the situation in Iraq.
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Original:  He denied receiving any money out of the scheme , saying, "What counts is, where's the money, senator?
Revised:  He denied receiving any money out of the scheme . Galloway demanded, "What counts is, where's the money, senator?
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Original:  The answer to that is nobody," while glaring toward US senator Norm Coleman (Republican from Minnesota), according to a New York Times report.
Revised:  The answer to that is nobody," while glaring toward U.S. senator Norm Coleman (Republican from Minnesota), according to a New York Times report.
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Original:  George Galloway also accused the US senators, especially senator Coleman, of shoddy standards of justice : he claimed they have already ruled him guilty, and that they rely on dubious evidence and wrongfuel or coerced testimonies.
Revised:  Galloway also accused the US senators, especially senator Coleman, of shoddy standards of justice : he claimed they have already ruled him guilty, and that they rely on dubious evidence and wrongfuel or coerced testimonies.
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Original:  George Galloway also accused the US senators, especially senator Coleman, of shoddy standards of justice : he claimed they have already ruled him guilty, and that they rely on dubious evidence and wrongfuel or coerced testimonies.
Revised:  George Galloway also accused the US senators, especially senator Coleman, of shoddy standards of justice . He claimed they have already ruled him guilty, and that they rely on dubious evidence and wrongfuel or coerced testimonies.
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Original:   In these circumstances, knowing what the world knows about how you treat prisoners in Abu Ghraib prison1, in Bagram Air Base [Afghanistan], in Guantanamo Bay -- including, if I may say, British citizens being held in those places -- I'm not sure how much credibility anyone would put on anything you manage to get from a prisoner in those circumstances.
Revised:  <p> In these circumstances, knowing what the world knows about how you treat prisoners in Abu Ghraib prison1, in Bagram Air Base [Afghanistan], in Guantanamo Bay -- including, if I may say, British citizens being held in those places -- I'm not sure how much credibility anyone would put on anything you manage to get from a prisoner in those circumstances.
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Original:  Charles Pasqua also denies any personal wrongdoing in the case and indicated he was "serene" and that he hoped that the investigations by the US Senate would probe the matter to the bottom.
Revised:  Charles Pasqua also denies any personal wrongdoing in the case . Pasqua indicated that he was "serene" and that he hoped that the investigations by the US Senate would probe the matter to the bottom.
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Original:  Charles Pasqua also denies any personal wrongdoing in the case and indicated he was "serene" and that he hoped that the investigations by the US Senate would probe the matter to the bottom.
Revised:  Charles Pasqua also denies any personal wrongdoing in the case and indicated he was "serene" and that he hoped the investigations by the US Senate would probe the matter to the bottom.
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Original:  Charles Pasqua also denies any personal wrongdoing in the case and indicated he was "serene" and that he hoped that the investigations by the US Senate would probe the matter to the bottom.
Revised:  Charles Pasqua also denies any personal wrongdoing in the case and indicated he was "serene" and that he hoped that the investigations by the U.S. Senate would probe the matter to the bottom.
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Original:  He judged the situation detrimental to relationships between the United States and France , and declared having, for this reason,  asked the president of the French Senate for the creation of an investigation commission, wishing that the French and US senatorial commissions should collaborate.
Revised:  He judged the situation detrimental to relationships between the United States and France . For this reason, asked the president of the French Senate for the creation of an investigation commission, wishing that the French and US senatorial commissions should collaborate.
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Original:  He judged the situation detrimental to relationships between the United States and France , and declared having, for this reason,  asked the president of the French Senate for the creation of an investigation commission, wishing that the French and US senatorial commissions should collaborate.
Revised:  He judged the situation detrimental to relationships between the United States and France , and declared having, for this reason, asked the president of the French Senate for the creation of an investigation commission, wishing that the French and U.S. senatorial commissions should collaborate.
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Original:  He declared himself convinced that misconducts took place in the oil-for-food program, and that it was probable that some French people were involved ;
Revised:  Pasqua declared himself convinced that misconducts took place in the oil-for-food program, and that it was probable that some French people were involved ;
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Original: Mr Pasqua mentioned the Swiss company Genmar, which the US report alleges to have served as an intermediary for Mr Pasqua .
Revised: Mr Pasqua mentioned the Swiss company Genmar, which the U.S. report claims to have served as an intermediary for Mr Pasqua .
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Original: Mr Pasqua mentioned the Swiss company Genmar, which the US report alleges to have served as an intermediary for Mr Pasqua .
Revised: Mr Pasqua mentioned the Swiss company Genmar, which the US report alleges to have served as Pasqua's intermediary .
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Original:  He denied information presented as facts in the report ;
Revised:  Pasqua denied information presented as facts in the report ;
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Original:  From December 2000 onwards, allocations meant for Pasqua ceased and were replaced by allocations to Bernard Guillet , who  was arrested by France in April in connection with abuses under the oil-for-food program.
Revised:  From December 2000 onwards, allocations meant for Pasqua ceased and were replaced by allocations to Bernard Guillet . was arrested by France in April in connection with abuses under the oil-for-food program.
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Original:  From December 2000 onwards, allocations meant for Pasqua ceased and were replaced by allocations to Bernard Guillet , who  was arrested by France in April in connection with abuses under the oil-for-food program.
Revised:  From December 2000 onwards, allocations meant for Pasqua ceased and were replaced by allocations to Bernard Guillet , who was arrested by French authorities in April in connection with abuses under the oil-for-food program.
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Original:  Mr Guillet has been put under formal investigation for allegedly participating in a system of occult kickbacks and fees involving major French companies between 1996 and 2001  , including Total.
Revised:  Mr Guillet has been put under formal investigation for allegedly participating in a system of occult kickbacks and fees between 1996 and 2001 , including Total.
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Original:  Mr Guillet has been put under formal investigation for allegedly participating in a system of occult kickbacks and fees involving major French companies between 1996 and 2001  , including Total.
Revised:  Mr Guillet has been put under formal investigation for allegedly participating in a system of occult kickbacks and fees involving major French companies between 1996 and 2001 involving major French companies , including Total.
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Original:  He claimed they have already ruled him guilty, and that they rely on dubious evidence and wrongfuel or coerced testimonies.
Revised:  He claimed they have already ruled him guilty, and that they rely on dubious evidence and wrongful or coerced testimonies.
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Original:  Pasqua declared himself convinced that misconducts took place in the oil-for-food program, and that it was probable that some French people were involved.
Revised:  Pasqua declared himself convinced that misconduct took place in the oil-for-food program, and that it was probable that some French people were involved.
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Original:  Pasqua pointed out that nothing in the senatorial evidence indicates that he had benefited from vouchers, only that one of his former advisors , Bernard Guillet, had received oil allocations in his name.
Revised:  Pasqua pointed out that nothing in the senatorial evidence indicates that he had benefited from vouchers, only that one of his former advisers , Bernard Guillet, had received oil allocations in his name.
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Original:  It is unclear how many flights were affected  
Revised:  It is unclear how many flights were affected . 
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Original:  Five people were injured after a Boeing 737-400 belonging to Adam Air overshot the runway today while landing at Hang Nadim Airport on Batam island in Indonesia.
Revised:  Five people were injured after a Boeing 737-400 , operated by Adam Air, overshot the runway today while landing at Hang Nadim Airport on Batam island in Indonesia.
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Original:  Five people were injured after a Boeing 737-400 belonging to Adam Air overshot the runway today while landing at Hang Nadim Airport on Batam island in Indonesia.
Revised:  Five people were injured after a Boeing 737-400 belonging to Adam Air overshot the runway today while landing at Hang Nadim Airport on the island of Batam in Indonesia.
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Original:  He suggested the weather condition may be tto blame for the crash, the third to strike the budjet carrier in just over a year.
Revised:  He suggested the weather condition may be to blame for the crash, the third to strike the budjet carrier in just over a year.
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Original:  Along with 10 other demonstrators, a journalist was arrested outside a Council of Europe conference in Warsaw on Monday May 16, in what activists have claimed is an attempt to suppress freedom of speech in Poland.
Revised: inuse Along with 10 other demonstrators, a journalist was arrested outside a Council of Europe conference in Warsaw on Monday May 16, in what activists have claimed is an attempt to suppress freedom of speech in Poland.
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Original: inuse Along with 10 other demonstrators, a journalist was arrested outside a Council of Europe conference in Warsaw on Monday May 16, in what activists have claimed is an attempt to suppress freedom of speech in Poland.
Revised:  Along with 10 other demonstrators, a journalist was arrested outside a Council of Europe conference in Warsaw on Monday May 16, in what activists have claimed is an attempt to suppress freedom of speech in Poland.
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Original:  As the Council conference met to allegedly discuss human rights conditions in the 46 member countries of the European region, despite the presence of participants such as Tony Blair and Italian prime minister Berlusconi, who were allegedly involved in systematic human rights violations such as war crimes in the 2003 invasion of Iraq and the killing of at least 100,000 civilians, around 1000 protestors gathered outside.
Revised:  As the Council conference met to allegedly discuss human rights conditions but attended by officials they accuse of human rights violations such as war crimes in the 2003 invasion of Iraq and the killing of at least 100,000 civilians, around 1000 protestors gathered outside.
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Original:  As the Council conference met to allegedly discuss human rights conditions in the 46 member countries of the European region, despite the presence of participants such as Tony Blair and Italian prime minister Berlusconi, who were allegedly involved in systematic human rights violations such as war crimes in the 2003 invasion of Iraq and the killing of at least 100,000 civilians, around 1000 protestors gathered outside.
Revised:  As the Council conference met to allegedly discuss human rights conditions in the 46 member countries of the European region, despite the presence of participants such as Tony Blair and Italian prime minister Berlusconi, who were allegedly involved in systematic human rights violations 
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Original:  During the demonstration, at least one incident of tension occurred between the massive, heavily armoured police presence and demonstrators .  After the demonstration finished and protestors were returning home, the police arrested 11 human rights activists, including a journalist from Indymedia who was filming the events (photograph - tall man in yellow/orange coat at right), as well as three members of Amnesty International and several members of the Polish w:pl:Federacja Anarchistyczna .
Revised:  . After the demonstration finished and protestors were returning home, the police arrested 11 human rights activists, including a journalist from Indymedia who was filming the events (photograph - tall man in yellow/orange coat at right), as well as three members of Amnesty International and several members of the Polish w:pl:Federacja Anarchistyczna .
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Original:  During the demonstration, at least one incident of tension occurred between the massive, heavily armoured police presence and demonstrators .  After the demonstration finished and protestors were returning home, the police arrested 11 human rights activists, including a journalist from Indymedia who was filming the events (photograph - tall man in yellow/orange coat at right), as well as three members of Amnesty International and several members of the Polish w:pl:Federacja Anarchistyczna .
Revised:  During the demonstration, at least one incident of tension occurred between the massive, heavily armoured police presence and demonstrators . As the demonstrations were ending, police arrested 11 human rights activists, including a journalist from Indymedia who was filming the events (photograph - tall man in yellow/orange coat at right), as well as three members of Amnesty International and several members of the Polish w:pl:Federacja Anarchistyczna .
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Original:  During the demonstration, at least one incident of tension occurred between the massive, heavily armoured police presence and demonstrators .  After the demonstration finished and protestors were returning home, the police arrested 11 human rights activists, including a journalist from Indymedia who was filming the events (photograph - tall man in yellow/orange coat at right), as well as three members of Amnesty International and several members of the Polish w:pl:Federacja Anarchistyczna .
Revised:  During the demonstration, at least one incident of tension occurred between the massive, heavily armoured police presence and demonstrators . After the demonstration finished and protestors were returning home, the police arrested 11 activists, including a journalist from Indymedia who was filming the events (photograph - tall man in yellow/orange coat at right), as well as three members of Amnesty International and several members of the Polish w:pl:Federacja Anarchistyczna .
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Original:  During the demonstration, at least one incident of tension occurred between the massive, heavily armoured police presence and demonstrators .  After the demonstration finished and protestors were returning home, the police arrested 11 human rights activists, including a journalist from Indymedia who was filming the events (photograph - tall man in yellow/orange coat at right), as well as three members of Amnesty International and several members of the Polish w:pl:Federacja Anarchistyczna .
Revised:  During the demonstration, at least one incident of tension occurred between the massive, heavily armoured police presence and demonstrators . After the demonstration finished and protestors were returning home, the police arrested 11 human rights activists, including a journalist from Indymedia who was filming the events .
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Original:  Activists consider the charge to be unjustified, noting that since the journalist was filming the events virtually continuously, he had little chance to carry out any violent attacks against the police.
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Original:  A 10 second police video which a police spokesperson recommended to indymedia readers on May 19 itself shows the Indymedia journalist with a video camera in his right hand (in bright orange/yellow jacket at top) at the time when the incident occurred.
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Original:  A large police presence was on hand to oversee the demonstations .
Revised:  A large police presence was on hand to oversee the demonstrations .
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Original:  Reporters Without Borders (Reporters sans frontières, or RSF) report Mr. Prujszyk was held for 39 hours, his tapes were reviewed, and though released he is under police surveilance and must report to the police weekly.
Revised:  Reporters Without Borders (Reporters sans frontières, or RSF) report Mr. Prujszyk was held for 39 hours, his tapes were reviewed, and though released he is under police surveillance and must report to the police weekly.
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Original: The protesters organized their march, begining from Warsaw Palace of Culture and Science and walking to the Royal Square and the Royal Castle, where the Council of Europe was meeting , believed to be concerning human rights conditions but attended by officials they accuse of human rights violations.
Revised: The protesters organized their march, beginning from Warsaw Palace of Culture and Science and walking to the Royal Square and the Royal Castle, where the Council of Europe was meeting , believed to be concerning human rights conditions but attended by officials they accuse of human rights violations.
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Original: The protesters organized their march, begining from Warsaw Palace of Culture and Science and walking to the Royal Square and the Royal Castle, where the Council of Europe was meeting , believed to be concerning human rights conditions but attended by officials they accuse of human rights violations.
Revised: The protesters organized their march, begining from Warsaw Palace of Culture and Science and walking to the Royal Square and the Royal Castle, where the Council of Europe was meeting . The council's meeting was believed to be concerning human rights conditions but attended by officials they accuse of human rights violations.
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Original:  They were unable to get into the Royal Square, so the demonstrators had to stop their march at Krakowskie Przedmiescie Street.
Revised:  The demonstrators were unable to get into the Royal Square, so the demonstrators had to stop their march at Krakowskie Przedmiescie Street.
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Original:  They were unable to get into the Royal Square, so the demonstrators had to stop their march at Krakowskie Przedmiescie Street.
Revised:  They were unable to get into the Royal Square, so they had to stop their march at Krakowskie Przedmiescie Street.
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