wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The New Zealand director of public health said that there the "swine flu will be a mild illness , but in some instances , the infection can cause more severe illness and, in a few tragic instances, death."
Revised:  The New Zealand director of public health said that there the "swine flu will be a mild illness but in some instances , the infection can cause more severe illness and, in a few tragic instances, death."
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Original:  The New Zealand director of public health said that there the "swine flu will be a mild illness , but in some instances , the infection can cause more severe illness and, in a few tragic instances, death."
Revised:  The New Zealand director of public health said that there the "swine flu will be a mild illness , but in some instances the infection can cause more severe illness and, in a few tragic instances, death."
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Original:  The Chief Coroner feels that the virus may have contributed to the deaths of two others as well.
Revised:  The Chief Coroner feels the virus may have contributed to the deaths of two others as well.
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Original: Rupert Grint, best known for playing Ron Weasley in the Harry Potter , films has now recovered from the H1N1 swine flu virus after missing some days on the set for the latest installment of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.
Revised: Rupert Grint, best known for playing Ron Weasley in the Harry Potter films, has now recovered from the H1N1 swine flu virus after missing some days on the set for the latest installment of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.
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Original:  An unnamed 16-year-old traveling between San Fransisco and Hong Kong was released from hospital after one week following her arrival in Hong Kong.
Revised:  An unnamed 16-year-old traveling between San Francisco and Hong Kong was released from hospital after one week following her arrival in Hong Kong.
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Original:  Photo credit: Keith Allison Steve McNair, former National Football League quarterback was found shot to death in an apartment in Tennessee at 1: 35 AM on July 4, 2009. 20-year old female Sahel Kazemi was also found dead of a gunshot wound in the same apartment, lying on the floor next to the sofa where McNair was found.
Revised:  Photo credit: Keith Allison Steve McNair, former National Football League quarterback was found shot to death in an apartment in Tennessee around 1: 35 AM on July 4, 2009. 20-year old female Sahel Kazemi was also found dead of a gunshot wound in the same apartment, lying on the floor next to the sofa where McNair was found.
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Original:  Former Titan's owner "Bud" Adams said of McNair "We are saddened and shocked to hear the news of Steve McNair's passing today.
Revised:  Titan's owner "Bud" Adams said of McNair "We are saddened and shocked to hear the news of Steve McNair's passing today.
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Original:  He was one of the finest players to play for our organization and one of the most beloved players by our fans.    
Revised:  He was one of the finest players to play for our organization and one of the most beloved players by our fans. " 
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Original:  They are awaiting an autopsy report on the two deceased before forming any conclusions about the situation  
Revised:  They are awaiting an autopsy report on the two deceased before forming any conclusions about the situation . 
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Original:  However, they also state that they are not actively pursuing any susepects at this time.
Revised:  However, they also state that they are not actively pursuing any suspects at this time.
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Original:  Titan's owner "Bud" Adams said of McNair  "We are saddened and shocked to hear the news of Steve McNair's passing today.
Revised:  Titan's owner "Bud" Adams said of McNair : "We are saddened and shocked to hear the news of Steve McNair's passing today.
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Original:  The bodies had been discovered around 1:00 PM on July 4, 2009 by Wayne Neely, a friend of McNair.
Revised:  The bodies were discovered around 1:00 PM on July 4, 2009 by Wayne Neely, a friend of McNair.
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Original:  They are awaiting an autopsy report on the two deceased before forming any conclusions about the situation . Category:National Football League Category:Football (American) Category:Sports Category:Tennessee Category:Maryland Category:United States Category:North America Category:Crime and la
Revised:  They are awaiting an autopsy report on the two deceased before forming any conclusions about the situation Category:National Football League Category:Football (American) Category:Sports Category:Tennessee Category:Maryland Category:United States Category:North America Category:Crime and la
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Original:  They are awaiting an autopsy report on the two deceased before forming any conclusions about the situation . Category:National Football League Category:Football (American) Category:Sports Category:Tennessee Category:Maryland Category:United States Category:North America Category:Crime and la
Revised:  They are awaiting an autopsy report on the two deceased before forming any conclusions about the situation . 
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Original:  There has been considerable confusion in the health sector after what was formerly known as the ministry of health was split into two- the ministry of medical services which is in charge of tertiary health care facilities (district, provincial and referral hospitals and research laboratories) and the ministry of public health and sanitation which is in charge of primary health care facilities (dispensaries and health centres in the community) and public health in the country.
Revised:  There has been considerable confusion in the health sector after what was formerly known as the ministry of health was split into two- the Ministry of Medical Services which is in charge of tertiary health care facilities (district, provincial and referral hospitals and research laboratories) and the ministry of public health and sanitation which is in charge of primary health care facilities (dispensaries and health centres in the community) and public health in the country.
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Original:  There has been considerable confusion in the health sector after what was formerly known as the ministry of health was split into two- the ministry of medical services which is in charge of tertiary health care facilities (district, provincial and referral hospitals and research laboratories) and the ministry of public health and sanitation which is in charge of primary health care facilities (dispensaries and health centres in the community) and public health in the country.
Revised:  There has been considerable confusion in the health sector after what was formerly known as the ministry of health was split into two- the ministry of medical services which is in charge of tertiary health care facilities (district, provincial and referral hospitals and research laboratories) and the Ministry of Public Health and Sanitation which is in charge of primary health care facilities (dispensaries and health centres in the community) and public health in the country.
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Original:  In a further twist, 8 more people are suspected to have the H1N1 virus in the north eastern town of Garissa.
Revised:  In a further twist, eight more people are suspected to have the H1N1 virus in the north eastern town of Garissa.
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Original:  The 8 are reported to have arrived in Kenya from the UK.
Revised:  The eight are reported to have arrived in Kenya from the UK.
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Original: The 34 British medical students who had been quarantined  in the Kenyan lakeside town of Kisumu were yesterday transported to the capital  Nairobi amid tight police security  . [[File:Kenya sm02.png|Kisumu west of Nairobi]]
Revised: The 34 British medical students who had been quarantined in the Kenyan lakeside town of Kisumu were transported to the capital Nairobi amid tight police security . [[File:Kenya sm02.png|Kisumu west of Nairobi]]
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Original: The 34 British medical students who had been quarantined  in the Kenyan lakeside town of Kisumu were yesterday transported to the capital  Nairobi amid tight police security  . [[File:Kenya sm02.png|Kisumu west of Nairobi]]
Revised: The 34 British medical students who had been quarantined in the Kenyan lakeside town of Kisumu were yesterday transported to the capital city of Nairobi amid tight police security . [[File:Kenya sm02.png|Kisumu west of Nairobi]]
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Original:  The students who have completed their courses of Tamiflu are expected to fly back to the UK tomorrow Sunday, ending their one week ordeal in Kenya East Africa.
Revised:  The students who have completed their courses of Tamiflu are expected to fly back to the UK Sunday, ending their one week ordeal in Kenya East Africa.
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Original: The government's swift response to contain the disease has been impressive despite attempts by government officials to cover up the real magnitude of the situation .
Revised: The government's swift response to contain the disease has been impressive .
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Original:  The WHO, which collects data on all laboratory confirmed cases of the flu put the number of students infected at 12 others who became infected from the  medical student who was originally infected in Nottingham from his girlfriend there.
Revised:  The WHO, which collects data on all laboratory confirmed cases of the flu put the number of students infected at 12 others who became infected from the fellow medical student who was originally infected in Nottingham from his girlfriend there.
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Original:  Test results of the primary school children who had come into contact with the students during their visit are awaited .
Revised:  Test results of the primary school children who had come into contact with the students during their visit are awaited 
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Original:  There has been considerable confusion in the health sector after what was formerly known as the ministry of health was split into two- the Ministry of Medical Services which is in charge of tertiary health care facilities (district, provincial and referral hospitals and research laboratories) and the Ministry of Public Health and Sanitation which is in charge of primary health care facilities (dispensaries and health centres in the community) and public health in the country .
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Original: __NOTOC__ The 34 British medical students who had been quarantined due to A(H1N1) flue virus in the Kenyan lakeside town of Kisumu were transported to the capital city of Nairobi amid tight police security on Sunday.
Revised:  The 34 British medical students who had been quarantined due to A(H1N1) flue virus in the Kenyan lakeside town of Kisumu were transported to the capital city of Nairobi amid tight police security on Sunday.
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Original:  The students who have completed their courses of Tamiflu are expected to fly back to the UK Sunday, ending their one week ordeal in Kenya East Africa.
Revised:  The students who have completed their courses of Tamiflu are expected to fly back to the United Kingdom Sunday, ending their one week ordeal in Kenya East Africa.
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Original:  The WHO , which collects data on all laboratory confirmed cases of the flu put the number of visiting students who became infected at 12.
Revised:  The World Health Organisation , which collects data on all laboratory confirmed cases of the flu put the number of visiting students who became infected at 12.
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Original:  MG Rover's collapse caused the loss of an extimated 15,000 jobs, including with various suppliers  [ 
Revised:  MG Rover's collapse caused the loss of an extimated 15,000 jobs, including with various suppliers [of 
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Original:  The move follows the conclusion of a four-year enquiry started immediatly after the firm became insolvent.
Revised:  The move follows the conclusion of a four-year enquiry started immediately after the firm became insolvent.
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Original:  MG Rover's collapse caused the loss of an extimated 15,000 jobs, including with various suppliers.
Revised:  MG Rover's collapse caused the loss of an estimated 15,000 jobs, including with various suppliers.
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Original: The group of four who owned MG Rover - John Towers, Nick Stephenson, Peter Beale and John Edwards - have been accused of asset stripping.
Revised: The group of four who owned MG Rover — John Towers, Nick Stephenson, Peter Beale and John Edwards - have been accused of asset stripping.
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Original: The group of four who owned MG Rover - John Towers, Nick Stephenson, Peter Beale and John Edwards - have been accused of asset stripping.
Revised: The group of four who owned MG Rover - John Towers, Nick Stephenson, Peter Beale and John Edwards — have been accused of asset stripping.
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Original:  The government should come down harder” said a Han woma 
Revised:  The government should come down harder” said a Han woman. 
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Original: Protests continued through Tuesday, spreading on Monday to the town of Kashgar.
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Original:  The Chinese government detained or arrested about 1,400 people and attempted to lock down communications including cellphones and Internet    
Revised:  The Chinese government detained or arrested about 1,400 people and attempted to lock down communications including cellphones and Internet . 
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Original:  The Chinese government detained or arrested about 1,400 people and attempted to lock down communications including cellphones and Internet.
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Original: Muslim Uyghurs are involved in China's largest ethnic clash since March 2008, involving at first perhaps 1,000 and up to 3,000 protestors.
Revised:  Uyghurs are involved in China's largest ethnic clash since March 2008, involving at first perhaps 1,000 and up to 3,000 protestors.
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Original:  It began as a protest encouraging authorities to look into a previous violent incident between Uighurs and Han Chinese in June.
Revised:  It began as a protest encouraging authorities to look into a previous violent incident between Uyghurs and Han Chinese in June.
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Original:  In the June incident, two Uighur men were reportedly beaten to death by a mob at a Guangdong province toy factory.
Revised:  In the June incident, two Uyghur men were reportedly beaten to death by a mob at a Guangdong province toy factory.
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Original:  One sentiment is that the "government does bald-faced injustice to Uighur People," said a Uighur student.
Revised:  One sentiment is that the "government does bald-faced injustice to Uyghur People," said a Uighur student.
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Original:  "Uighurs have suffered for years under racial profiling and unjust government policies that have painted the entire Uighur population as criminals and terrorists," said Rebiya Kadeer, a Uighur and human rights proponent based in Washington.
Revised:  "Uighurs have suffered for years under racial profiling and unjust government policies that have painted the entire Uyghur population as criminals and terrorists," said Rebiya Kadeer, a Uighur and human rights proponent based in Washington.
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Original:  "Uighurs have suffered for years under racial profiling and unjust government policies that have painted the entire Uighur population as criminals and terrorists," said Rebiya Kadeer, a Uighur and human rights proponent based in Washington.
Revised:  "Uighurs have suffered for years under racial profiling and unjust government policies that have painted the entire Uighur population as criminals and terrorists," said Rebiya Kadeer, a Uyghur and human rights proponent based in Washington.
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Original:  Uighur demonstrators during this riot were seeking an end to discrimination and not separatism, according to Alim Seytoff, Uyghur American Association spokesperson.
Revised:  Uyghur demonstrators during this riot were seeking an end to discrimination and not separatism, according to Alim Seytoff, Uyghur American Association spokesperson.
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Original:  On Tuesday morning a small contingent of Uighur gathered to urge the release of those detained following the Sunday riot.
Revised:  On Tuesday morning a small contingent of Uyghur gathered to urge the release of those detained following the Sunday riot.
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Original:  Uyghur separatists have been seeking independence in China.
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Original:  Otros mandatarios, quienes habían prometido acompañarlo en su retorno, no lo harán pero seguirán los sucesos desde El Salvador.
Revised:  Other leaders of Latin American, who had promised to travel together with Zelaya, will instead monitor the developing of events from El Salvador.
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Original:  Entre estos líderes estaban los presidentes Rafael Correa (Ecuador), Cristina Fernández de Kirchner (Argentina) , y Fernando Lugo (Paraguay), junto con el Secretario General de la OEA , José Miguel Insulza.
Revised:  Among these leaders were the presidents Rafel Correa (Ecuador), Cristina Fernández de Kirchner (Argentina) , y Fernando Lugo (Paraguay), junto con el Secretario General de la OEA , José Miguel Insulza.
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Original:  Entre estos líderes estaban los presidentes Rafael Correa (Ecuador), Cristina Fernández de Kirchner (Argentina) , y Fernando Lugo (Paraguay), junto con el Secretario General de la OEA , José Miguel Insulza.
Revised:  Entre estos líderes estaban los presidentes Rafael Correa (Ecuador), Cristina Fernández de Kirchner (Argentina) and Fernando Lugo (Paraguay), junto con el Secretario General de la OEA , José Miguel Insulza.
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Original:  Entre estos líderes estaban los presidentes Rafael Correa (Ecuador), Cristina Fernández de Kirchner (Argentina) , y Fernando Lugo (Paraguay), junto con el Secretario General de la OEA , José Miguel Insulza.
Revised:  Entre estos líderes estaban los presidentes Rafael Correa (Ecuador), Cristina Fernández de Kirchner (Argentina) , y Fernando Lugo (Paraguay), together with the Secretary-General of the Organization of American States (OAS) , José Miguel Insulza.
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Original:  " Si Zelaya aterriza y considera oportuno que vayamos, iremos ", declaró Correa.
Revised:  " If Zelaya lands and regards it timely for us to go, we will go ", declaró Correa.
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Original:  Asimismo , Cristina Fernández dijo que " hay un intento manifiesto de Zelaya de retornar, aún cuando no lo dejen, y de restaurar el orden en el país ". La decisión ocurre poco después de que la Organización de los Estados Americanos (OEA) votara suspender a Honduras de la organización.
Revised:  Asimismo , Cristina Fernández added that " hay un intento manifiesto de Zelaya de retornar, aún cuando no lo dejen, y de restaurar el orden en el país ". La decisión ocurre poco después de que la Organización de los Estados Americanos (OEA) votara suspender a Honduras de la organización.
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Original:  Asimismo , Cristina Fernández dijo que " hay un intento manifiesto de Zelaya de retornar, aún cuando no lo dejen, y de restaurar el orden en el país ". La decisión ocurre poco después de que la Organización de los Estados Americanos (OEA) votara suspender a Honduras de la organización.
Revised:  Asimismo , Cristina Fernández dijo que " there is a clear attempt from Zelaya to return, even if they don't allow it, and to restore order in the country ". La decisión ocurre poco después de que la Organización de los Estados Americanos (OEA) votara suspender a Honduras de la organización.
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Original:  Dicha organización resolvió suspender de manera " inmediata " el gobierno de facto hondureño (liderado por Roberto Micheletti), de acuerdo a lo previsto por la Carta Democrática Interamericana (CDI).
Revised:  Dicha organización resolvió suspender de manera " inmediately " el gobierno de facto hondureño (liderado por Roberto Micheletti), de acuerdo a lo previsto por la Carta Democrática Interamericana (CDI).
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Original:  The archbishop of Tegucigalpa, the capital of Honduras, urged Zelaya not to return, fearing a possible "bloodbath" .
Revised:  The archbishop of Tegucigalpa, the capital of Honduras, urged Zelaya not to return, fearing a possible "bloodbath" 
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Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Categoría:Golpe de Estado en Honduras de 2009 Categoría:OEA Categoría:Política Categoría:Honduras Categoría:México y Centroamérica fr:Honduras : atterissage interdit pour l'ancien préside
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Original:  Fuentes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Categoría:Golpe de Estado en Honduras de 2009 Categoría:OEA Categoría:Política Categoría:Honduras Categoría:México y Centroamérica fr:Honduras : atterissage interdit pour l'ancien préside
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Original:  Manuel Zelaya, the president of Honduras  toppled in a coup d'état, has begun his way back to his country.
Revised:  Manuel Zelaya, the president of Honduras who was toppled in a coup d'état, has begun his way back to his country.
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Original:  Zelaya travels together with  President of the United Nations General Assembly, Miguel D'Escoto.
Revised:  Zelaya travels together with the President of the United Nations General Assembly, Miguel D'Escoto.
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Original:  Other leaders of Latin American , who had promised to travel together with Zelaya, will instead monitor the developing of events from El Salvador.
Revised:  Other leaders of Latin America , who had promised to travel together with Zelaya, will instead monitor the developing of events from El Salvador.
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Original:  Other leaders of Latin American , who had promised to travel together with Zelaya, will instead monitor the developing of events from El Salvador.
Revised:  Other leaders of Latin American , who had promised to travel together with Zelaya, will instead monitor the development of events from El Salvador.
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Original:  Among these leaders were the presidents Rafel Correa (Ecuador), Cristina Fernández de Kirchner (Argentina) and Fernando Lugo (Paraguay), together with the Secretary-General of the Organization of American States (OAS), José Miguel Insulza.
Revised:  Among these leaders are the presidents Rafel Correa (Ecuador), Cristina Fernández de Kirchner (Argentina) and Fernando Lugo (Paraguay), together with the Secretary-General of the Organization of American States (OAS), José Miguel Insulza.
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Original:  OAS resolved  suspend "inmediately" the de facto Honduran government leaded by Roberto Micheletti, in accordance with the Inter-American Democratic Charter.
Revised:  OAS resolved to suspend "inmediately" the de facto Honduran government leaded by Roberto Micheletti, in accordance with the Inter-American Democratic Charter.
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Original:  However, fear has aroused that Zelaya's return can trigger  more violence.
Revised:  However, fear has aroused that Zelaya's return can trigger off more violence.
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Original:  The archbishop of Tegucigalpa, the capital of Honduras, urged Zelaya not to return, fearing a possible "bloodbath"  
Revised:  The archbishop of Tegucigalpa, the capital of Honduras, urged Zelaya not to return, fearing a possible "bloodbath" . 
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