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Original:  Some senators who do not belong to the Brazilian ruling party PT warned to a scenario like the one in Venezuela where the President Hugo Chávez concentrated all political power on his hands using the support of social movements
Revised:  Some senators who do not belong to the Brazilian ruling party PT warned of a scenario like the one in Venezuela where the President Hugo Chávez concentrated all political power on his hands using the support of social movements
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Original: They said that they defend the investigation of corruption schemes, however they said that the Lula government is they victim of a destabilization campaign.
Revised: They said that they defend the investigation of corruption schemes, however they said that the Lula government is the victim of a destabilization campaign.
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Original:  Other parlamentarians , even some of the Workers' Party, didn't agree with the coup argument.
Revised:  Other parliamentarians , even some of the Workers' Party, didn't agree with the coup argument.
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Original:   The occupiers,    all employees of Vestas, began their sit-in on July 20 after Vestas announced plans to shut down production of wind turbines in Northern Europe, at the cost of 575 jobs in Newport and over 1400 jobs elsewhere in England and in Denmark 
Revised:  The occupiers, The occupiers, all employees of Vestas, began their sit-in on July 20 after Vestas announced plans to shut down production of wind turbines in Northern Europe, at the cost of 575 jobs in Newport and over 1400 jobs elsewhere in England and in Denmark 
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Original: Vestas employees have been occupying the Newport factory since July 20 An eviction notice has been served on the occupiers remaining in the Vestas factory in Newport, Isle of Wight, England, occupiers confirm.
Revised:  An eviction notice has been served on the occupiers remaining in the Vestas factory in Newport, Isle of Wight, England, occupiers confirm.
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Original: John Hughes, a director of such movies as "Sixteen Candles", and " The Breakfast Club " has died due to a heart attack.
Revised: John Hughes, director of such movies as "Sixteen Candles", and " The Breakfast Club " has died due to a heart attack.
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Original:  His generation is survived by his wife of 39 years, Nancy ;
Revised:  He is survived by his wife of 39 years, Nancy ;
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Original:  His generation is survived by his wife of 39 years, Nancy ;
Revised:  His generation is survived by his wife of 39 years, Nancy ,
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Original:  John Hughes, director of such movies as Sixteen Candles, Pretty in Pink and The Breakfast Club, died Thursday due to a heart attack.
Revised: American film director John Hughes, director of such movies as Sixteen Candles, Pretty in Pink and The Breakfast Club, died Thursday due to a heart attack.
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Original:  John Hughes, director of such movies as Sixteen Candles, Pretty in Pink and The Breakfast Club, died Thursday due to a heart attack.
Revised:  John Hughes, noted for such movies as Sixteen Candles, Pretty in Pink and The Breakfast Club, died Thursday due to a heart attack.
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Original:  A statement that was released said that he experienced the heart attack while on a morning stroll in Manhattan  .
Revised:  A statement that was released said that he experienced the heart attack while on a morning stroll in Manhattan , New York .
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Original:  In the 1990s, he made the Home Alone series, which turned into a box office sensation and turning Macaulay Culkin into a star.
Revised:  In the 1990s, he made the Home Alone series, which became a box office sensation and turning Macaulay Culkin into a star.
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Original:  In the 1990s, he made the Home Alone series, which turned into a box office sensation and turning Macaulay Culkin into a star.
Revised:  In the 1990s, he made the Home Alone series, which turned into a box office sensation and turned Macaulay Culkin into a star.
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Original:  Hughes was born on the 18th of February , 1950 in Michigan.
Revised:  Hughes was born on February 18 , 1950 in Michigan.
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Original:  He started his film making career as an advertising copywriter in Chicago.
Revised:  He started his career as an advertising copywriter in Chicago.
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Original:  The Mariners second goal came five minites later thanks to an own goal by Rodrigo Vargas.
Revised:  The Mariners second goal came five minutes later thanks to an own goal by Rodrigo Vargas.
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Original:  200px|Central Coast Mariners playing Queensland Roar (now Brisbane Roar) during the 2008-09 season The Central Coast Mariners have defeated Melbourne Victory two-nil in the opening game of the Australian 2009-10 A-League  season at Etihad Stadium in Melbourne.
Revised:  200px|Central Coast Mariners playing Queensland Roar (now Brisbane Roar) during the 2008-09 season The Central Coast Mariners have defeated Melbourne Victory two-nil in the opening game of the Australian 2009-10 A-League football season at Etihad Stadium in Melbourne.
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Original:  Despite having more of the possession, Melbourne could not score.
Revised:  Despite having the majority of the possession, Melbourne could not score.
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Original:  The conference brought together representatives from the GLAM sector, comprising galleries, libraries, archives and museums, politicians, and members of the Wikimedia community (who edit the online encyclopedia Wikipedia and its sister sites), to enter into a dialogue regarding ways the three areas can work collaboratively to preserve and promote cultural collections online  & &  &   
Revised:  The conference brought together representatives from the GLAM sector, comprising galleries, libraries, archives and museums, politicians, and members of the Wikimedia community (who edit the online encyclopedia Wikipedia and its sister sites), to enter into a dialogue regarding ways the three areas can work collaboratively to preserve and promote cultural collections online . & & & 
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Original:  The conference brought together representatives from the GLAM sector, comprising galleries, libraries, archives and museums, politicians, and members of the Wikimedia community (who edit the online encyclopedia Wikipedia and its sister sites), to enter into a dialogue regarding ways the three areas can work collaboratively to preserve and promote cultural collections online  & &  &   
Revised:  The conference brought together representatives from the GLAM sector, comprising galleries, libraries, archives and museums, politicians, and members of the Wikimedia community (who edit the online encyclopedia Wikipedia and its sister sites), to enter into a dialogue regarding ways the three areas can work collaboratively to preserve and promote cultural collections online & & Education & 
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Original: This week, over 150 delegates from cultural institutions, government and the online community gathered at the Australian War Memorial in Canberra over one and a half days for the first GLAM-WIKI conference.
Revised: Last week, over 150 delegates from cultural institutions, government and the online community gathered at the Australian War Memorial in Canberra over one and a half days for the first GLAM-WIKI conference.
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Original:  Notes: Day 1 keynote : Jennifer Riggs Wikimedian Q A Case studies - PHM Flickr Commons%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WM De / Bundesarchiv Copyright Technical Business Education%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Day 2 keynote: Sen. Kate Lundy Panel discussion: Senator Kate Lundy, ACT Labor.
Revised:  A Case studies - PHM Flickr Commons%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WM De / Bundesarchiv Copyright Technical Business Education%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Day 2 keynote: Sen. Kate Lundy Panel discussion: Senator Kate Lundy, ACT Labor.
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Original:  Notes: Day 1 keynote : Jennifer Riggs Wikimedian Q A Case studies - PHM Flickr Commons%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WM De / Bundesarchiv Copyright Technical Business Education%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Day 2 keynote: Sen. Kate Lundy Panel discussion: Senator Kate Lundy, ACT Labor.
Revised:  Notes: Day 1 keynote : Jennifer Riggs Wikimedian Q %DIFDELCMD < & %%% WM De / Bundesarchiv Copyright Technical Business Education%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Day 2 keynote: Sen. Kate Lundy Panel discussion: Senator Kate Lundy, ACT Labor.
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Original:  Notes: Day 1 keynote : Jennifer Riggs Wikimedian Q A Case studies - PHM Flickr Commons%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WM De / Bundesarchiv Copyright Technical Business Education%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Day 2 keynote: Sen. Kate Lundy Panel discussion: Senator Kate Lundy, ACT Labor.
Revised:  Notes: Day 1 keynote : Jennifer Riggs Wikimedian Q A Case studies - PHM Flickr Commons%DIFDELCMD < & %%% WM De / Bundesarchiv Copyright Technical Business %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Day 2 keynote: Sen. Kate Lundy Panel discussion: Senator Kate Lundy, ACT Labor.
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Original:  WA Greens. spokesperson for Broadband, Communications the Digital Economy Alistair Coe, ACT Liberals, Legislative Assembly . Shadow minister for Heritage and Youth Seb Chan, Powerhouse Museum and Gov2.0 Taskforce member Paul Reynolds , Adjunct Director to the Digital Library of the National Library of NZ and the NZ National Digital Forum Kylie Johnson, New Media Adviser, Department Environment, Water, Heritage and the Arts  Timing: NPG   Gallery:
Revised:  WA Greens. spokesperson for Broadband, Communications the Digital Economy Alistair Coe, ACT Liberals, Legislative Assembly . Shadow minister for Heritage and Youth Seb Chan, Powerhouse Museum and Gov2.0 Taskforce member Seb Chan , Adjunct Director to the Digital Library of the National Library of NZ and the NZ National Digital Forum Kylie Johnson, New Media Adviser, Department Environment, Water, Heritage and the Arts Timing: NPG Gallery:
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Original:  WA Greens. spokesperson for Broadband, Communications the Digital Economy Alistair Coe, ACT Liberals, Legislative Assembly . Shadow minister for Heritage and Youth Seb Chan, Powerhouse Museum and Gov2.0 Taskforce member Paul Reynolds , Adjunct Director to the Digital Library of the National Library of NZ and the NZ National Digital Forum Kylie Johnson, New Media Adviser, Department Environment, Water, Heritage and the Arts  Timing: NPG   Gallery:
Revised:  WA Greens. spokesperson for Broadband, Communications the Digital Economy Alistair Coe, ACT Liberals, Legislative Assembly . Shadow minister for Heritage and Youth Seb Chan, Powerhouse Museum and Gov2.0 Taskforce member Paul Reynolds , Adjunct Director to the Digital Library of the National Library of NZ and the NZ National Digital Forum Kylie Johnson, the New Media Advisor for the Department of the Environment, Water, Heritage and the Arts Timing: NPG Gallery:
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Original:  online collections featuring Senator Lundy as well as Senator Scott Ludlam, ACT Legislative Assembly shadow minister Alistair Coe, Gov2.0 Taskforce member Seb Chan, Adjunct Director to the Digital Library of the National Library of New Zealand Paul Reynolds and Kylie Johnson, the New Media Advisor for the Department of the Environment, Water, Heritage and the Arts.
Revised:  online collections featuring Senator Lundy as well as Senator Scott Ludlam, ACT Legislative Assembly shadow minister Alistair Coe, Government 2.0 Taskforce member Seb Chan, Adjunct Director to the Digital Library of the National Library of New Zealand Paul Reynolds and Kylie Johnson, the New Media Advisor for the Department of the Environment, Water, Heritage and the Arts.
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Original:   Two case studies were presented at the conference, the first being the Powerhouse Museum's experimental release of some of their photographic collection to Flickr Commons, and the second the collaboration between the German Wikimedia chapter and Bundesarchiv to release their collection to Wikimedia Commons.
Revised:  Two case studies were presented at the conference, the first being the Powerhouse Museum's experimental release of some of their photographic collection to Flickr Commons, and the second the collaboration between the German Wikimedia chapter and German Federal Archives to release their collection to Wikimedia Commons.
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Original:  County, State and Federal officials will be closely monitoring Hurricane Felicia, and will provide regular updates for the public.  
Revised:  County, State and Federal officials will be closely monitoring Hurricane Felicia, and will provide regular updates for the public. " 
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Original:   The state's last significant hurricane, Iniki of 1992, caused six deaths and inflicted billions of dollars in damage  
Revised:  The state's last significant hurricane, Iniki of 1992, caused six deaths and inflicted billions of dollars in damage . 
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Original:  The NHC estimate the storm's minimum barometric pressure at 948 millibars.
Revised:  Forecasters estimate the storm's minimum barometric pressure at 948 millibars.
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Original: Residents in Hawaii are currently tracking the progress of Hurricane Felicia, a Category 3 storm on the Saffir Simpson Hurricane Scale  that is threatening to affect the state later in its lifetime.
Revised: Residents in Hawaii are currently tracking the progress of Hurricane Felicia, a Category 3 storm on the Saffir Simpson Hurricane Scale , that is threatening to affect the state later in its lifetime.
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Original:  State ministers from Khartoum and the commissioner of Karrary district  visited Islanj Island after the accident
Revised:  State ministers from Khartoum , the commissioner of Karrary district visited Islanj Island after the accident
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Original:  Police said the accident was caused by the severity of the current and the overloading of the boat," a police statement said.
Revised: " Police said the accident was caused by the severity of the current and the overloading of the boat," a police statement said.
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Original:  The boat had been overloaded before forty farmersboarded with their goods  . State ministers from Khartoum, the commissioner of Karrary district and the police visited Islanj Island after the accident
Revised:  Forty farmers, along with their goods . State ministers from Khartoum, the commissioner of Karrary district and the police visited Islanj Island after the accident
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Original:  The boat had been overloaded before forty farmersboarded with their goods  . State ministers from Khartoum, the commissioner of Karrary district and the police visited Islanj Island after the accident
Revised:  The boat had been overloaded before forty farmersboarded with their goods . State ministers from Khartoum, the commissioner of Karrary district and the police visited Islanj Island following the accident
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Original:  A number of workers at Vestas's smaller plant in Cowes occupied the plant there on the evening of August 4, with activists from the RMT and environmental groups taking to the roof and waving flags proclaiming the occupation  
Revised:  A number of workers at Vestas's smaller plant in Cowes occupied the plant there on the evening of August 4, with activists from the RMT and environmental groups taking to the roof and waving flags proclaiming the occupation . 
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Original: After barricading the office which has served as a living quarters for 19 nights against police entry, three of the workers, Justin Moody, Mark Smith  and Dave Arbuthnott, exited via a fire escape escorted by security staff;
Revised: After barricading the office which has served as a living quarters for 19 nights against police entry, three of the workers, Justin Moody, Mark Smith , and Dave Arbuthnott, exited via a fire escape escorted by security staff;
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Original:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence they " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
Revised:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details . Shaw says that while they wouldn 't use violence they " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
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Original:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence they " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
Revised:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they won 't use violence they " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
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Original:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence they " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
Revised:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence to resist the police, " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
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Original:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence they " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
Revised:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence they " them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
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Original:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence they " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
Revised:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence they " will defend %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
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Original:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence they " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% selves "
Revised:  If the police come to remove them, as happened earlier today at Vestas's Newport plant, the five occupiers say they will resist "determinedly and creatively" but offered no details , Shaw saying that while they wouldn 't use violence they " will defend them%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% we will defend ourselves "
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Original:  Shaw says that while they won't use violence to resist the police, "we will defend ourselves"  
Revised:  Shaw says that while they won't use violence to resist the police, "we will defend ourselves" . 
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Original: There are also allegations coming forward  of a "don't ask,don't tell" approach being applied by US health officials when confronted with human deaths which may be caused by eating BSE contaminated meat.
Revised: There are also allegations coming forward There have also been allegations of a "don't ask,don't tell" approach being applied by US health officials when confronted with human deaths which may be caused by eating BSE contaminated meat.
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Original:  practices such as cow carcass's with abscesses being hosed off, wrapped up and shipped to the consumer.
Revised:  practices such as cow carcasses with abscesses being hosed off, wrapped up and shipped to the consumer.
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Original: On Thursday, August 6, 2009, several shootouts occured in Mexico leaving nine cartel suspects dead, killing 7 police officers, and injuring close to 30 others.
Revised: On Thursday, August 6, 2009, several shootouts occured in Mexico leaving nine cartel suspects dead, killing seven police officers, and injuring close to 30 others.
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Original:  Following the several gun battles police seized of 1.2 million pesos (more than $92,000), cocaine, assault rifles, police uniforms, bullet proof vests, handcuffs, hand grenades, and a variety of other military weapons  The cities of Silao, La Calera and Irapuato in the state of Guanajuato suffered both grenade and artillery shootouts which took the live of one police officer killed an innocent bystander, critically injured another 18.
Revised:  Following the several gun battles police seized of 1.2 million pesos (more than $92,000), cocaine, assault rifles, police uniforms, bullet proof vests, handcuffs, hand grenades, and a variety of other military weapons . The cities of Silao, La Calera and Irapuato in the state of Guanajuato suffered both grenade and artillery shootouts which took the live of one police officer killed an innocent bystander, critically injured another 18.
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Original:  The police station in Silao was attached by hand grenades, Ak-47 assault rifles and R-15 semi-automatic rifles killing two people and placing ten in the hospital.
Revised:  The police station in Silao was attacked by hand grenades, Ak-47 assault rifles and R-15 semi-automatic rifles killing two people and placing ten in the hospital.
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Original:  The police station in Silao was attached by hand grenades, Ak-47 assault rifles and R-15 semi-automatic rifles killing two people and placing ten in the hospital.
Revised:  The police station in Silao was attached by hand grenades, AK-47 assault rifles and R-15 semi-automatic rifles killing two people and placing ten in the hospital.
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Original:  The police station in Silao was attached by hand grenades, Ak-47 assault rifles and R-15 semi-automatic rifles killing two people and placing ten in the hospital.
Revised:  The police station in Silao was attached by hand grenades, Ak-47 assault rifles and R-15 semi-automatic rifles ; the attacks killed two people and placing ten in the hospital.
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Original:  The police station in Silao was attached by hand grenades, Ak-47 assault rifles and R-15 semi-automatic rifles killing two people and placing ten in the hospital.
Revised:  The police station in Silao was attached by hand grenades, Ak-47 assault rifles and R-15 semi-automatic rifles killing two people and placed ten in the hospital.
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Original:  Another attack Thursday night left a police investigator killed in the city of Ciudad Juárez in the state of Chihuahua.
Revised:  Another attack Thursday night killed a police investigator killed in the city of Ciudad Juárez in the state of Chihuahua.
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Original:  Another attack Thursday night left a police investigator killed in the city of Ciudad Juárez in the state of Chihuahua.
Revised:  Another attack Thursday night left a police investigator in the city of Ciudad Juárez in the state of Chihuahua.
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Original:  Mexican federal police  arrested top leaders of the La Familia Michoacana drug cartel which resulted in retaliation.
Revised:  Mexican federal police recently arrested top leaders of the La Familia Michoacana drug cartel which resulted in retaliation.
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