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Original:  In January, the Indonesian government held a special energy summit to attract investment into its energy infrastructure.
Revised:  In January, the Indonesian government held a special energy summit to attract investment in their energy infrastructure.
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Original:  At the summit they said they wanted to add 22,000 megawatts to Indonesia's curent capacity of 23,000 megawatts  in order to support the country's growth.
Revised:  At the summit they set the goal of adding 22,000 megawatts to Indonesia's curent capacity of 23,000 megawatts in order to support the country's growth.
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Original:  At the summit they said they wanted to add 22,000 megawatts to Indonesia's curent capacity of 23,000 megawatts  in order to support the country's growth.
Revised:  At the summit they said they wanted to add 22,000 megawatts to Indonesia's present capacity of 23,000 megawatts in order to support the country's growth.
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Original:  At the summit they said they wanted to add 22,000 megawatts to Indonesia's curent capacity of 23,000 megawatts  in order to support the country's growth.
Revised:  At the summit they said they wanted to add 22,000 megawatts to Indonesia's curent capacity of 23,000 megawatts , in order to support the country's growth.
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Original:  The World Bank and others have warned that without more investment in the country's energy infrastructure , an energy deficit will result.
Revised:  The World Bank and others have warned that without more investment in the country's energy infrastructure an energy deficit will result.
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Original:  But foreign investors , already wary of investing in Indonesia due to the Asian Financial Crisis of 1998, have become more so.
Revised:  However, foreign investors remain wary of investing in Indonesia due to the Asian Financial Crisis of 1998, have become more so.
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Original:  But foreign investors , already wary of investing in Indonesia due to the Asian Financial Crisis of 1998, have become more so.
Revised:  But foreign investors , already wary of investing in Indonesia due to the Asian Financial Crisis of 1998.
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Original:  Some of the main lines of the grid are over 20 years old, according to PLN president Eddie Widiono.
Revised:  Some of the main lines on the grid are over 20 years old, according to PLN president Eddie Widiono.
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Original:  The outage caused traffic jams in Jakarta, forced  several international and domestic flights at Jakarta's Soekarno-Hatta International Airport to be canceled , shut down Jakarta's electric train service, and disrupted hospital operations.
Revised:  The blackout caused traffic jams in Jakarta, forced several international and domestic flights at Jakarta's Soekarno-Hatta International Airport to be canceled , shut down Jakarta's electric train service, and disrupted hospital operations.
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Original:  The outage caused traffic jams in Jakarta, forced  several international and domestic flights at Jakarta's Soekarno-Hatta International Airport to be canceled , shut down Jakarta's electric train service, and disrupted hospital operations.
Revised:  The outage caused traffic jams in Jakarta, forced cancellation of several international and domestic flights at Jakarta's Soekarno-Hatta International Airport to be canceled , shut down Jakarta's electric train service, and disrupted hospital operations.
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Original:  The outage caused traffic jams in Jakarta, forced  several international and domestic flights at Jakarta's Soekarno-Hatta International Airport to be canceled , shut down Jakarta's electric train service, and disrupted hospital operations.
Revised:  The outage caused traffic jams in Jakarta, forced several international and domestic flights at Jakarta's Soekarno-Hatta International Airport , shut down Jakarta's electric train service, and disrupted hospital operations.
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Original:  Some larger hospitals had to delay surgery, and some smaller hospitals could not receive patients.
Revised:  Some larger hospitals were forced to delay surgeries while many smaller hospitals could not receive patients.
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Original:  Mulyo Aji, a PLN official, said more outages are likely in the future as energy demand increases with no new supplies of electricity scheduled to come online 
Revised:  Mulyo Aji, a PLN official, said more outages are likely in the future as energy demand increases , without any corresponding new supplies of electricity scheduled to come online 
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Original:  Mulyo Aji, a PLN official, said more outages are likely in the future as energy demand increases with no new supplies of electricity scheduled to come online 
Revised:  Mulyo Aji, a PLN official, said more outages are likely in the future as energy demand increases with no new supplies of electricity scheduled to come online soon
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Original: The outage follows attempts to deal with the country's growing energy crisis, including conservation and trying to allow private companies to provide energy, which was ruled unconstitutional in 2004.
Revised: The power failure follows attempts to deal with the country's growing energy crisis, including conservation and trying to allow private companies to provide energy, which was ruled unconstitutional in 2004.
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Original:  Mulyo Aji, a PLN official, said more outages are likely in the future as energy demand increases, without any corresponding new supplies of electricity scheduled to come online soon
Revised:  Mulyo Aji, a PLN official, said more power failures are likely in the future as energy demand increases, without any corresponding new supplies of electricity scheduled to come online soon
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Original: A power outage in Indonesia that left about 100 million people without electricity has generated increased energy concerns throughout the nation .
Revised: A power outage in Indonesia that left about 100 million people without electricity has caused a political crisis .
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Original:  The blackout does not appear to be caused by current tight global petroleum supplies and high associated prices, but rather is related to deficiencies in Indonesia's power generation capacity.
Revised:  The blackout appears related to deficiencies in Indonesia's power generation capacity.
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Original:  However, foreign investors remain wary of investing in Indonesia due to the Asian Financial Crisis of 1998.
Revised:  However, foreign investors remain wary of investing in Indonesia .
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Original:  "Currently, in the regions of Osh and Dzhalal-Abad , 97 people have died.
Revised:  "Currently, in the regions of Osh and Jhalalabad , 97 people have died.
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Original:  A further 1247 have been hospitalised," a spokeswoman commented    .
Revised:  A further 1247 have been hospitalised," a spokeswoman commented . .
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Original:  Meanwhile, as many as 75,000 ethnic Uzbeks have fled to the border with Uzbekistan to escape the ongoing violence.
Revised:  Meanwhile, thousands of ethnic Uzbeks have fled to the border with Uzbekistan to escape the ongoing violence.
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Original:  Another witness described that "there is a veil of smoke covering the whole city."
Revised:  Another witness described there being " a veil of smoke covering the whole city."
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Original:  According to reports, cars and buildings were also been set alight by the fighting groups, with some apartments burnt to the ground .
Revised:  Cars and buildings were also been set alight by the fighting groups, with some apartments burnt to the ground .
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Original:  According to officials, most of the dead were bank employees   .
Revised:  According to officials, most of the dead were bank employees . .
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Original: The incident occurred at a church rally, led by Christian leaders voicing their opposition to a new constitution to be voted on in a referendum later this summer, primarily because it is to include a clause for abortion and recognises existing Islamic courts .
Revised: The incident occurred at a church rally, led by Christian leaders voicing their opposition to a new constitution to be voted on in a referendum later this summer, primarily because it is to include a clause for abortion .
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Original:  We don't know as yet the cause of this incident.  [ 
Revised:  We don't know as yet the cause of this incident. " [ 
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Original:  Abdullahi Mo ` alim Kerow, a police officer, described what happened to the Reuters news agency: " The  clashes came after some of the government troops started to rob a civilian car and the police were trying to stop it.
Revised:  Abdullahi Mo ' alim Kerow, a police officer, described what happened to the Reuters news agency: " The clashes came after some of the government troops started to rob a civilian car and the police were trying to stop it.
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Original:  Abdullahi Mo ` alim Kerow, a police officer, described what happened to the Reuters news agency: " The  clashes came after some of the government troops started to rob a civilian car and the police were trying to stop it.
Revised:  Abdullahi Mo ` alim Kerow, a police officer, described the incident to Reuters; " The clashes came after some of the government troops started to rob a civilian car and the police were trying to stop it.
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Original:  Abdullahi Mo ` alim Kerow, a police officer, described what happened to the Reuters news agency: " The  clashes came after some of the government troops started to rob a civilian car and the police were trying to stop it.
Revised:  Abdullahi Mo ` alim Kerow, a police officer, described what happened to the Reuters news agency: " t clashes came after some of the government troops started to rob a civilian car and the police were trying to stop it.
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Original:  Abdullahi Mo ` alim Kerow, a police officer, described what happened to the Reuters news agency: " The  clashes came after some of the government troops started to rob a civilian car and the police were trying to stop it.
Revised:  Abdullahi Mo ` alim Kerow, a police officer, described what happened to the Reuters news agency: " The he clashes came after some of the government troops started to rob a civilian car and the police were trying to stop it.
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Original:  However in other accounts of the incident it was the police who were attempting to hijack trucks carrying food aid, and it was the army who were intervening to prevent the theft.
Revised:  However conflicting accounts claim it was police attempting to hijack trucks carrying food aid, and it was the army who were intervening to prevent the theft.
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Original:  However in other accounts of the incident it was the police who were attempting to hijack trucks carrying food aid, and it was the army who were intervening to prevent the theft.
Revised:  However in other accounts of the incident it was the police who were attempting to hijack trucks carrying food aid, and the army were intervening to prevent the theft.
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Original:  According to Kerow, the injured were hospitalised, and the clash stopped shortly after that .
Revised:  According to Kerow, the injured were hospitalised, and the clash stopped shortly after .
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Original:  Ten of the wounded were civilians, and one of them later died, said Alie Muse Abdi, the coordinator of ambulance services in the capital
Revised:  Ten of the wounded were civilians, and one later died, said Alie Muse Abdi, the coordinator of ambulance services in the capital
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Original:  Ten of the wounded were civilians, and one of them later died, said Alie Muse Abdi, the coordinator of ambulance services in the capital
Revised:  Ten of the wounded were civilians, and one of them later died, said Alie Muse Abdi, coordinator of ambulance services in the capital
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Original:  Officials from neighbouring states also affected by the spill, such as Texas, Alabama, and Mississippi, haven't yet announced how much they want put into the fund  
Revised:  Officials from neighbouring states also affected by the spill, such as Texas, Alabama, and Mississippi, haven't yet announced how much they want put into the fund . 
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Original:  They wed in 2013 in Massachusetts, two years after an Indiana civil union    
Revised:  They wed in 2013 in Massachusetts, two years after an Indiana civil union . 
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Original:  Ian Blair ( Metropolitian Police commisioner ) let us suffer.
Revised:  Ian Blair ( Metropolitan Police commissioner ) let us suffer.
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Original:  We strongly refute any suggestion that a figure anywhere in the region of one million dollars has been offered as compensation.  
Revised:  We strongly refute any suggestion that a figure anywhere in the region of one million dollars has been offered as compensation. " 
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Original: The British newspaper Daily Mail reports that Scotland Yard has offered the family of Jean Charles de Menezes, who was mistaken for a suicide bomber and shot by British police on July 22nd, one million US$ (£560,000) in compensation.
Revised: The British newspaper Daily Mail claims that Scotland Yard has offered the family of Jean Charles de Menezes, who was mistaken for a suicide bomber and shot by British police on July 22nd, one million US$ (£560,000) in compensation.
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Original:  Their actions have come under scrutiny as the National Transportation Safety Committee  investigates.
Revised:  Their actions have come under scrutiny as the National Transportation Safety Committee (NTSC) investigates.
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Original:  The   suggests weather caused the disaster, suggesting ice led to engine failure  .
Revised:  The The suggests weather caused the disaster, suggesting ice led to engine failure .
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Original:  It took three minutes for the plane to reach the water, during which time the flight crew tried to regain control. claims the flight crew switched off computers designed to aid them after they issued alerts ;
Revised:  It took three minutes for the plane to reach the water, during which time the flight crew tried to regain control. claims the flight crew switched off computers designed to aid them after they issued alerts .
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Original: The documents were released on Thursday by the U.S. National archive under the Freedom of Information Act.
Revised: The documents were released on Thursday by the National Security Archive under the Freedom of Information Act.
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Original:  They show that the deputy chief of mission at the U.S. Embassy in Pakistan, Alan Eastham Jr., met with Wakil Ahmed, a close aide to Taliban leader Mullah Omar, in November and December 1998 
Revised:  They show that the deputy chief of mission at the U.S. Embassy in Pakistan, Alan Eastham Jr., met with Wakil Ahmed, a close aide to Taliban leader Mullah Omar, in November and December 1998. 
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Original:   Wakil Ahmed told Eastham Jr. that the Taliban would understand the U.S. desire to have bin Laden expelled from Afghanistan.
Revised:  In that meeting Wakil Ahmed told Eastham Jr. that the Taliban would understand the U.S. desire to have bin Laden expelled from Afghanistan.
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Original:  The said that one possibility to "resolve" the "bin Laden Situation" would be if the U.S. were to "kill him, or arrange for bin Laden to be assasinated  
Revised:  He said that one possibility to "resolve" the "bin Laden Situation" would be if the U.S. were to "kill him, or arrange for bin Laden to be assasinated 
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Original:  The said that one possibility to "resolve" the "bin Laden Situation" would be if the U.S. were to "kill him, or arrange for bin Laden to be assasinated  
Revised:  The said that one possibility to "resolve" the "bin Laden Situation" would be if the U.S. were to "kill him, or arrange for bin Laden to be assasinated . 
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Original: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. state department , top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed to assasinate Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies  in 1998.
Revised: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. State Department , top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed to assasinate Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies in 1998.
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Original: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. state department , top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed to assasinate Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies  in 1998.
Revised: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. state department , top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed to assassinate Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies in 1998.
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Original: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. state department , top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed to assasinate Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies  in 1998.
Revised: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. state department , top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed to assasinate Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies | in 1998.
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Original:  In that meeting Wakil Ahmed told Eastham Jr. that the Taliban would understand the U.S. desire to have bin Laden expelled from  Afghanistan.
Revised:  In that meeting Wakil Ahmed told Eastham Jr. that the Taliban would understand the U.S. desire to have bin Laden expelled from w: Afghanistan.
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Original:  He said that one possibility to "resolve" the "bin Laden Situation" would be if the U.S. were to "kill him, or arrange for bin Laden to be assasinated  .
Revised:  He said that one possibility to "resolve" the "bin Laden Situation" would be if the U.S. were to "kill him, or arrange for bin Laden to be assasinated " .
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Original:  Wakil said the Taliban wanted to resolve the "bin Laden problem" as quickly as possible because a failure to do so would result in the Taliban's "termination 
Revised:  Wakil said the Taliban wanted to resolve the "bin Laden problem" as quickly as possible because a failure to do so would result in the Taliban's "termination "
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Original: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. State Department, top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed to assassinate Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies | in 1998.
Revised: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. State Department, top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed to assassinate Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies in 1998.
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Original:  In that meeting Wakil Ahmed told Eastham Jr. that the Taliban would understand the U.S. desire to have bin Laden expelled from w: Afghanistan.
Revised:  In that meeting Wakil Ahmed told Eastham Jr. that the Taliban would understand the U.S. desire to have bin Laden expelled from Afghanistan.
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Original: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. State Department, top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed to assassinate Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies in 1998.
Revised: According to documents recently declassified by the U.S. State Department, top U.S. and Taliban officials discussed the potential assassination of Osama bin Laden after the bombings of U.S. embassies in 1998.
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Original:  He said that one possibility to "resolve" the "bin Laden Situation" would be if the U.S. were to "kill him, or arrange for bin Laden to be assasinated ".
Revised:  He said that one possibility to "resolve" the "bin Laden Situation" would be if the U.S. were to "kill him, or arrange for bin Laden to be assassinated ".
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Original:  They show that the deputy chief of mission at the U.S. Embassy in Pakistan, Alan Eastham Jr., met with Wakil Ahmed, a close aide to Taliban leader Mullah Omar, on November 28th 1998 at the Taliban embassy in Islamabad.
Revised:  They show that the deputy chief of mission at the U.S. Embassy in Pakistan, Alan Eastham Jr., met with Wakil Ahmed, a close aide to Taliban leader Mullah Omar, on November 28 1998 at the Taliban embassy in Islamabad.
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Original: Croatian singer, Darko Rundek, was attacked on a street in Belgrade, Serbia and Montenegro yesterday.
Revised: Croatian singer, Darko Rundek, was attacked on a street in Serbia and Montenegro yesterday.
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Original:  Rundek was in Belgrade as he was performing at Beer Fest.
Revised:  Rundek was in Belgrade performing at "Beer Fest".
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Original:  He was not seriously injured, and was released from  hospital shortly after his arrival.
Revised:  He was not seriously injured, and was released from the hospital shortly after his arrival.
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Original:  The police is still looking for suspects, several young men.
Revised:  The police are still looking for suspects, several young men.
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Original:  The police is still looking for suspects, several young men.
Revised:  The police is still looking for several young male suspects.
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Original:  During his performance at Beer Fest, there were few smaller incidents when several people got in fight with the police
Revised:  During his performance there were a few smaller incidents when several people got in fight with the police
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Original:  During his performance at Beer Fest, there were few smaller incidents when several people got in fight with the police
Revised:  During his performance at Beer Fest, there were few smaller incidents where several people fought with police
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Original:  Darko Rundek ( French resident of Croatia), was attacked on a street in Serbia and Montenegro yesterday.
Revised:  Darko Rundek ( a french resident of Croatia), was attacked on a street in Serbia and Montenegro yesterday.
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Original:  Rundek was in Belgrade performing at "Beer Fest" , he left about 5 'o clock in the morning with good company, two ladys from Belgrade when he was attacked by nationalist Serbs.
Revised:  Rundek was in Belgrade performing at "Beer Fest" . He left at around 5 'o clock in the morning with good company, two ladys from Belgrade when he was attacked by nationalist Serbs.
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Original:  Rundek was in Belgrade performing at "Beer Fest" , he left about 5 'o clock in the morning with good company, two ladys from Belgrade when he was attacked by nationalist Serbs.
Revised:  Rundek was in Belgrade performing at "Beer Fest" , he left about 5 :00 a.m. with two women from Belgrade when he was attacked by nationalist Serbs.
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Original: Croatian singer Darko Rundek (a french resident of Croatia ), was attacked on a street in Serbia and Montenegro yesterday.
Revised: Singer Darko Rundek (a french resident of Croatia ), was attacked on a street in Serbia and Montenegro yesterday.
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Original: Croatian singer Darko Rundek (a french resident of Croatia ), was attacked on a street in Serbia and Montenegro yesterday.
Revised: Croatian singer Darko Rundek (a French resident of Croatian descent ), was attacked on a street in Serbia and Montenegro yesterday.
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Original:  He left at around 5:00 a.m.  with two women from Belgrade  when he was attacked by nationalist Serbs.
Revised:  He left at around 5:00 a.m. , with two women from Belgrade when he was attacked by nationalist Serbs.
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Original:  He left at around 5:00 a.m.  with two women from Belgrade  when he was attacked by nationalist Serbs.
Revised:  He left at around 5:00 a.m. with two women from Belgrade , when he was attacked by nationalist Serbs.
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