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Original:  "I appreciate the fact that the company notified  McGregor, but did they not think the test would affect the surrounding communities?"  commenter Lorena Resident said on the website for the Waco Tribune-Herald.
Revised:  "I appreciate the fact that the company notified McGregor, but did they not think the test would affect the surrounding communities?" commenter Lorena Resident on the website for the Waco Tribune-Herald.
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Original:  Each Falcon 9 rocket uses 9 Merlin engines A computer simulation of a Merlin 9 launch At 10:30pm on November 23, 2008, near the airport in McGregor, Texas, Space Exploration Technologies Corporation (SpaceX) tested their new Falcon 9 rocket at full thrust for nearly 3 minutes (160 seconds).
Revised:  Each Falcon 9 rocket uses 9 Merlin engines A computer simulation of a Falcon 9 launch At 10:30pm on November 23, 2008, near the airport in McGregor, Texas, Space Exploration Technologies Corporation (SpaceX) tested their new Falcon 9 rocket at full thrust for nearly 3 minutes (160 seconds).
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Original:  NASA will be retiring their fleet of Columbia class Space Shuttles in 2010, but will not have the Shuttles' replacement ready until at least 2014.
Revised:  NASA will be retiring their fleet of Columbia Class Space Shuttles in 2010, but will not have the Shuttles' replacement ready until at least 2014.
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Original: SpaceX is a contender for future commercial contracts from various government run space agencies, with NASA in particularly interested . NASA will be retiring their fleet of Columbia Class Space Shuttles in 2010, but will not have the Shuttles' replacement ready until at least 2014.
Revised: SpaceX is a contender for future commercial contracts from various government run space agencies, with NASA expressing particular interest . NASA will be retiring their fleet of Columbia Class Space Shuttles in 2010, but will not have the Shuttles' replacement ready until at least 2014.
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Original:  NASA hopes to fill some of this gap via commercial launch from companies such as SpaceX.
Revised:  NASA hopes to fill some of this gap using commercial launches from companies such as SpaceX.
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Original:  SpaceX has already made an agreement with NASA to conduct three test flights of the Dragon capsule in conjunction with the Falcon 9.
Revised:  SpaceX has already reached an agreement with NASA to conduct three test flights of the Dragon capsule in conjunction with the Falcon 9.
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Original:  " External Links SpaceX video of launch tes
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Original: Although Israel briefly lifted its blockade of crossings in Gaza today, UN officials warn that a further blockade could lead to dire consequences for some 750,000 Gazans who rely on UN food aid.
Revised: Although Israel briefly lifted its blockade of crossings in the Gaza Strip today, United Nations (UN) officials warn that a further blockade could lead to dire consequences for some 750,000 Gazans who rely on UN food aid.
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Original:  Israel closed the Gaza Strip because of claims of rocket fire eminating from the area
Revised:  Israel closed the Gaza Strip because of claims of rocket fire emanating from the area
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Original: Although the crossing was briefly lifted to allow some food aid and medical supplies through  , United Nations Relief and Works Agency (UNRWA) spokesman Christopher Gunness warned that "it is just not enough."
Revised: The border crossing was opened to allow some food aid and medical supplies through , United Nations Relief and Works Agency (UNRWA) spokesman Christopher Gunness warned that "it is just not enough."
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Original: Although the crossing was briefly lifted to allow some food aid and medical supplies through  , United Nations Relief and Works Agency (UNRWA) spokesman Christopher Gunness warned that "it is just not enough."
Revised: Although the crossing was briefly lifted to allow some food aid and medical supplies through , however , United Nations Relief and Works Agency (UNRWA) spokesman Christopher Gunness warned that "it is just not enough."
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Original: The Rudd Labor government introduced its "fair work" bill into the House of Representatives today which will dismantle the former government's WorkChoices industrial relations platform.
Revised: The Rudd Labor government introduced its "fair work" bill into the House of Representatives today , effectively dismantling the former government's WorkChoices industrial relations platform.
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Original:  A vote is expected in the House of Representatives by the end of the year, but a Senate inquiry will be held before the bill is debated by the Senate.
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Original:  Neither unions or employers were completely satisfied with the bill, which the government has hailed as evidence it had worked on a balanced system .
Revised:  Neither unions or employers were completely satisfied with the bill, which the government has hailed as evidence it has come up with a balanced system .
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Original:  Neither unions or employers were completely satisfied with the bill, which the government has hailed as evidence it had worked on a balanced system .
Revised:  Neither unions or employers were completely satisfied with the bill, which the government has hailed as evidence it had worked on a balanced system 
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Original:  The mining industry has been critical of the new system fearing that unions will interfere with the way they operate.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "This bill is the greatest increase in the union movement's power since 1901," Australian Mines and Metals Association workplace director Christopher Platt told Reuters.
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Original:  Platt said the new laws would shift the focus of work negotiations away from productivity and into disruptive union turf wars.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 'The only winners will be union bosses and the union movement generally,' Mr Platt said
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Original: 200px|Julia Gillard introduced new industrial relations laws to federal parliament today The Rudd Labor government introduced its "fair work" bill into the House of Representatives today, effectively dismantling the former government's WorkChoices industrial relations platform.
Revised:  The Rudd Labor government introduced its "fair work" bill into the House of Representatives today, effectively dismantling the former government's WorkChoices industrial relations platform.
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Original:  According to Ms Gilalrd the new Industrial Relations System "balances the interests of employers and employees and balances the granting of rights with the imposition of responsibilities."
Revised:  According to Ms Gillard the new Industrial Relations System "balances the interests of employers and employees and balances the granting of rights with the imposition of responsibilities."
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Original:  Workers earning more than  $100,000 a year being exempt from award wages;
Revised:  Workers earning more than A $100,000 a year being exempt from award wages;
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Original:  200px|Julia Gillard introduced new industrial relations laws to federal parliament today The bill was presented to parliament by acting Prime Minister and Minister for Industrial Relations, Julia Gillard.
Revised:  200px|Julia Gillard introduced new industrial relations laws to federal parliament today The bill was presented to parliament by deputy Prime Minister and Minister for Industrial Relations, Julia Gillard.
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Original: 41-year-old Maninder Pal Singh Kohli, a  sandwich delivery driver, was convicted today at Winchester Crown Court in Hampshire, UK of the murder and rape of teenager Hannah Foster.
Revised:  Maninder Pal Singh Kohli, a sandwich delivery driver, was convicted today at Winchester Crown Court in Hampshire, UK of the murder and rape of teenager Hannah Foster.
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Original: 41-year-old Maninder Pal Singh Kohli, a  sandwich delivery driver, was convicted today at Winchester Crown Court in Hampshire, UK of the murder and rape of teenager Hannah Foster.
Revised: 41-year-old Maninder Pal Singh Kohli, a 41-year-old sandwich delivery driver, was convicted today at Winchester Crown Court in Hampshire, UK of the murder and rape of teenager Hannah Foster.
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Original: 41-year-old Maninder Pal Singh Kohli, a  sandwich delivery driver, was convicted today at Winchester Crown Court in Hampshire, UK of the murder and rape of teenager Hannah Foster.
Revised: 41-year-old Maninder Pal Singh Kohli, a sandwich delivery driver, was convicted today at Winchester Crown Court in Hampshire, United Kingdom of the murder and rape of teenager Hannah Foster.
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Original:  The 17-year-old  was walking home from a night out in Southampton on 14 March 2003 but never returned ;
Revised:  The 17-year-old girl was walking home from a night out in Southampton on 14 March 2003 but never returned ;
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Original:  The 17-year-old  was walking home from a night out in Southampton on 14 March 2003 but never returned ;
Revised:  The 17-year-old was walking home from a night out in Southampton on March 14, 2003 but never returned ;
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Original:  He spent 16 months on the run, during which time he remarried, before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police forces .
Revised:  He spent 16 months on the run, during which time he remarried, before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police .
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Original:  Kohli remained in Indian custody while Hilary and Trevor Foster, the victim's parents, campaigned for his extradition to the UK to face trial . During this time, neither parent worked (Hilary is a cardiac nurse and Trevor worked for gas exploration company BG Group) and they left Hannah's bedroom exactly as she had left it .
Revised:  Kohli remained in custody in India while Hilary and Trevor Foster, the victim's parents, campaigned for his extradition to the UK to face trial . During this time, neither parent worked (Hilary is a cardiac nurse and Trevor worked for gas exploration company BG Group) and they left Hannah's bedroom exactly as she had left it .
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Original:  Kohli remained in Indian custody while Hilary and Trevor Foster, the victim's parents, campaigned for his extradition to the UK to face trial . During this time, neither parent worked (Hilary is a cardiac nurse and Trevor worked for gas exploration company BG Group) and they left Hannah's bedroom exactly as she had left it .
Revised:  Kohli remained in Indian custody while Hilary and Trevor Foster, the victim's parents, campaigned for his extradition to the UK to face trial .
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Original:  He spent 16 months on the run, during which time he remarried, before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
Revised:  Kohli spent sixteen months on the run, during which time he remarried, before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
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Original: Maninder Pal Singh Kohli, a 41-year-old sandwich delivery driver, was convicted today at Winchester Crown Court in Hampshire, United Kingdom of the murder and rape of teenager Hannah Foster.
Revised: Maninder Pal Singh Kohli, a 41-year-old sandwich delivery driver, was convicted today at Winchester Crown Court in Hampshire, United Kingdom for the murder and rape of teenager Hannah Foster.
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Original:  The 17-year-old girl was walking home from a night out in Southampton on March 14, 2003  but never returned  .
Revised:  The 17-year-old girl was walking home from a night out in Southampton on March 14, 2003 , but never returned .
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Original:  The 17-year-old girl was walking home from a night out in Southampton on March 14, 2003  but never returned  .
Revised:  The 17-year-old girl was walking home from a night out in Southampton on March 14, 2003 but never returned home .
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Original:  She managed to call the emergency services hoping that the operator would hear what was happening, but the call was terminated when she was unable to speak.
Revised:  She was able to call emergency services, hoping that the operator would hear what was happening, but the call was terminated when she was unable to speak.
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Original:  Kohli spent sixteen months on the run , during which time he remarried,  before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
Revised:  Kohli spent sixteen months running from authorities , during which time he remarried, before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
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Original:  Kohli spent sixteen months on the run , during which time he remarried,  before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
Revised:  Kohli spent sixteen months on the run , during which time he remarried, , but not before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
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Original:  Shortly after this he gave, then retracted, a televised confession of the murder.
Revised:  Shortly after thereafter, he gave, then retracted, a televised confession of the murder.
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Original:  Map showing location of Hampshire According to court records, the victim had spent the evening with friends just a short distance from the family home in Portswood and was snatched by Kohli just yards away from her house.
Revised:  Map showing location of Hampshire According to court records, Hannah had spent the evening with friends just a short distance from the family home in Portswood and was snatched by Kohli just yards away from her house.
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Original:  She was able to call emergency services , hoping that the operator would hear what was happening , but the call was terminated when she was unable to speak . After dumping her body, Kohli went home to his wife and two sons, before fleeing to India four days later.
Revised:  She was able to call emergency services , hoping that the operator would hear what was happening . Unable to speak, the operatoer terminated the call . After dumping her body, Kohli went home to his wife and two sons, before fleeing to India four days later.
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Original:  Kohli spent sixteen months running from authorities, during which time he remarried, , but not before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
Revised:  Kohli spent sixteen months running from authorities, during which time he remarried, but not before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
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Original:  He has been sentenced to life imprisonment and will serve a minimum of 24 years  
Revised:  He has been sentenced to life imprisonment and will serve a minimum of 24 years . 
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Original: Kohli spent sixteen months running from authorities, during which time he remarried , but not before being arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
Revised: Kohli spent sixteen months running from authorities, during which time he remarried . Eventually he was arrested in a joint operation between Hampshire Constabulary and Indian police.
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Original:  But with nobody answering on the other end of the line , the operator terminated the call . After dumping her body, Kohli went home to his wife and two sons , before fleeing to India four days later.
Revised:  However, with nobody actually on the line an automatic system led the call to be terminated . After dumping her body, Kohli went home to his wife and two sons , before fleeing to India four days later.
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Original: US Fed announces a $800 billion stimulus package The Federal Reserve is to inject $ 800 billion into the US economy in an effort to stabilise the financial system.
Revised: US Fed announces a US$800 billion stimulus package The Federal Reserve is to inject US$ 800 billion into the US economy in an effort to stabilise the financial system.
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Original: US Fed announces a $800 billion stimulus package The Federal Reserve is to inject $ 800 billion into the US economy in an effort to stabilise the financial system.
Revised: US Fed announces a $800 billion stimulus package The Federal Reserve is to inject $ 800 billion into the United States economy in an effort to stabilise the financial system.
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Original:  In total, about one and a half million people are said to have been affected by the flooding . "Almost all the deaths were caused by landslides that left people buried in their own homes, " said Luiz Henrique da Silveira, Santa Catarina's governor
Revised:  In total, about one and a half million people are said to have been affected by the flooding . In total, about one and a half million people are said to have been affected by the flooding
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Original:  This brings Ryanair's total number of outstanding orders with the US manufacture to 230.
Revised:  This brings Ryanair's total number of outstanding orders with the US manufacturer to 230.
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Original: Ryanair is the world's most profitable airline, having reported record profits of €269m earlier this year, and is pursueing an agressive expansion plane which willl see it's total number of passengers jump to 70m over the next few years.
Revised: Ryanair is the world's most profitable airline, having reported record profits of €269m earlier this year, and is pursueing an agressive expansion plane which will see it's total number of passengers jump to 70m over the next few years.
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Original: Ryanair is the world's most profitable airline, having reported record profits of €269m earlier this year, and is pursueing an agressive expansion plane which will see it's total number of passengers jump to 70m over the next few years.
Revised: Ryanair is the world's most profitable airline, having reported record profits of €269m earlier this year, and is pursuing an agressive expansion plane which will see it's total number of passengers jump to 70m over the next few years.
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Original: Ryanair is the world's most profitable airline, having reported record profits of €269m earlier this year, and is pursueing an agressive expansion plane which will see it's total number of passengers jump to 70m over the next few years.
Revised: Ryanair is the world's most profitable airline, having reported record profits of €269m earlier this year, and is pursueing an agressive expansion plan which will see it's total number of passengers jump to 70m over the next few years.
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Original:  President declared a truce after a violent evening in 's . There was a breakthrough in peace just five days ago when protesters agreed to unblock downtown streets.
Revised:  President declared a truce after a violent evening in 's . There was brief peace just five days ago when protesters agreed to unblock downtown streets.
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Original:  That peace was soon broken as violence occurred when interior ministry troops, special "" security forces, and police officers confronted protesters.
Revised:  That was soon broken as violence occurred when interior ministry troops, special "" security forces, and police officers confronted protesters.
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Original:  President declared a truce after a violent evening in  's . There was brief peace just five days ago when protesters agreed to unblock downtown streets.
Revised:  President declared a truce after a violent evening in Kiev 's . There was brief peace just five days ago when protesters agreed to unblock downtown streets.
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Original:  It has been added to the list over over 90 ships seized or hijacked by pirates in the region this year  
Revised:  It has been added to the list over over 90 ships seized or hijacked by pirates in the region this year . 
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Original:  A man has come forward to say he is the owner of a Thai ship that was being hijacked by pirates  in the Gulf of Aden, off the coast of the African nation of Somalia coast on November 18.
Revised:  A man has come forward to say he is the owner of a Thai ship that was being hijacked by pirates in the Gulf of Aden, off the coast of the African nation of Somalia on November 18.
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Original: The jury has announced that it has come to a verdict in the Michael Jackson trial ;
Revised: On June 13, 2005, the jury in the Michael Jackson trial ;
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Original:  Jackson has left the courtroom with no comment to reporters .
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Original: On  June 13, 2005, the jury in the Michael Jackson trial announced a verdict of not guilty on all 10 counts . Jackson left the courtroom with no comment to reporters, although he is expected to make a statement shortly.
Revised: The jury hearing the Michael Jackson trial has come to a final decision today, drawing to a close the long and widely hyped trial centering on the famous performer. June 13, 2005, the jury in the Michael Jackson trial announced a verdict of not guilty on all 10 counts . Jackson left the courtroom with no comment to reporters, although he is expected to make a statement shortly.
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Original: On  June 13, 2005, the jury in the Michael Jackson trial announced a verdict of not guilty on all 10 counts . Jackson left the courtroom with no comment to reporters, although he is expected to make a statement shortly.
Revised: On On this June 13, 2005, the jury in the Michael Jackson trial announced a verdict of not guilty on all 10 counts . Jackson left the courtroom with no comment to reporters, although he is expected to make a statement shortly.
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Original:  The charges brought against the famous singer were : One count of conspiracy to commit child abduction, false imprisonment or extortion: Not guilty Four counts of lewd acts with a child under 14: Not guilty One count of attempted lewd act on child under 14: Not guilty Four counts of giving alcohol to enable child molestation: Not guilt   
Revised:  The charges brought against the famous singer included : One count of conspiracy to commit child abduction, false imprisonment or extortion: Not guilty Four counts of lewd acts with a child under 14: Not guilty One count of attempted lewd act on child under 14: Not guilty Four counts of giving alcohol to enable child molestation: Not guilt 
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Original:  The charges brought against the famous singer were : One count of conspiracy to commit child abduction, false imprisonment or extortion: Not guilty Four counts of lewd acts with a child under 14: Not guilty One count of attempted lewd act on child under 14: Not guilty Four counts of giving alcohol to enable child molestation: Not guilt   
Revised:  The charges brought against the famous singer were : One count of conspiracy to commit child abduction, false imprisonment or extortion: Not guilty Four counts of lewd acts with a child under 14: Not guilty One count of attempted lewd act on child under 14: Not guilty Four counts of giving alcohol to enable child molestation: Not guilty 
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