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Original:  Ocean acidification has occurred previously in Earth's history, and the resulting ecological collapse in the oceans had long-lasting effects for global carbon cycling and climate.
Revised:  Ocean acidification has occurred previously in Earth's history, and the resulting ecological collapse in the oceans had long-lasting effects on global carbon cycling and climate.
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Original:  The carbon cycle describes the fluxes of carbon dioxide () between the oceans, terrestrial biosphere, lithosphere, and the atmosphere.
Revised:  The carbon cycle describes the fluxes of carbon dioxide () between the oceans, terrestrial biosphere, lithosphere, and atmosphere.
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Original:  Human activities such as the combustion of fossil fuels and land use changes have led to a new flux of into the atmosphere.
Revised:  Human activities such as the combustion of fossil fuels and land-use changes have led to a new flux of into the atmosphere.
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Original:  These changes are predicted to accelerate as more anthropogenic is released to the atmosphere and taken up by the oceans.
Revised:  These changes are predicted to accelerate as more anthropogenic is released into the atmosphere and taken up by the oceans.
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Original:  In shallow coastal and shelf regions  a number of factors interplay to affect pH change in addition to atmospheric .
Revised:  In shallow coastal and shelf regions , a number of factors interplay to affect pH change in addition to atmospheric .
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Original: ]] Of the extra carbon dioxide added into the oceans, some remains as dissolved carbon dioxide, while the rest contributes towards making additional bicarbonate (and additional carbonic acid).
Revised: ]] Of the extra carbon dioxide added into the oceans, some remain as dissolved carbon dioxide, while the rest contributes towards making additional bicarbonate (and additional carbonic acid).
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Original:  However, some studies have found different response to ocean acidification, with coccolithophore calcification and photosynthesis both increasing under elevated atmospheric p, an equal decline in primary production and calcification in response to elevated or the direction of the response varying between species.
Revised:  However, some studies have found different responses to ocean acidification, with coccolithophore calcification and photosynthesis both increasing under elevated atmospheric p, an equal decline in primary production and calcification in response to elevated or the direction of the response varying between species.
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Original:  + Acidication rates in different marine regions Location Acidification rate (10-3 pH units / year) Period Data source Iceland -2.4 1984 – 2009 Direct measurements Drake Passage -1.8 2002-2012 Direct measurements Canary (ESTOC) -1.7 1995 – 2004 Direct measurements Hawaii (HOT) -1.9 1989 – 2007 Direct measurements Bermuda (BATS) -1.7 1984 – 2012 Direct measurements Coral Sea -0.2 ~1700 – ~1990 Proxy reconstruction Eastern Mediterranean -2.3 1964 – 2005 Proxy reconstruction
Revised:  + Acidication rates in different marine regions Location Acidification rate (10-3 pH units / year) Period Data source Iceland -2.4 1984 – 2009 Direct measurements Drake Passage -1.8 2002 – 2012 Direct measurements Canary (ESTOC) -1.7 1995 – 2004 Direct measurements Hawaii (HOT) -1.9 1989 – 2007 Direct measurements Bermuda (BATS) -1.7 1984 – 2012 Direct measurements Coral Sea -0.2 ~1700 – ~1990 Proxy reconstruction Eastern Mediterranean -2.3 1964 – 2005 Proxy reconstruction
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Original: Luo and Wang 2003aLuo and Wang 2003b 2SFCA can also be used to measure other accessibility such as accessibility to jobs, to cancer care facilities, etc.
Revised: Luo and Wang 2003aLuo and Wang 2003b 2SFCA can also be used to measure other ccessibility such as accessibility to jobs, to cancer care facilities, etc.
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Original: Luo and Wang 2003aLuo and Wang 2003b 2SFCA can also be used to measure other ccessibility such as accessibility to jobs, to cancer care facilities, etc.
Revised: Luo and Wang 2003aLuo and Wang 2003b 2SFCA can also be used to measure other accessibility such as accessibility to jobs, to cancer care facilities, etc.
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Original: ]] In pathology, hypertrophic decidual vasculopathy, abbreviated HDV, is the histomorphologic correlate of gestational hypertension, which may be seen intrauterine growth restriction (IUGR)   .
Revised: ]] In pathology, hypertrophic decidual vasculopathy, abbreviated HDV, is the histomorphologic correlate of gestational hypertension, as may be seen intrauterine growth restriction (IUGR) .
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Original:   ]  Company History Introduction October 16, 2001 - KwikMed was purchased by Peter Ax, Managing Partner of Phoenix Capital Management (PCM).
Revised:  ] Company history Introduction October 16, 2001 - KwikMed was purchased by Peter Ax, Managing Partner of Phoenix Capital Management (PCM).
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Original:   ]  Company History Introduction October 16, 2001 - KwikMed was purchased by Peter Ax, Managing Partner of Phoenix Capital Management (PCM).
Revised:  ] Company History Introduction October 16, 2001 - KwikMed was purchased by Peter Ax, managing partner of Phoenix Capital Management (PCM).
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Original:  Peter Ax was formerly Senior Vice President and Head of Private Equity at Lehman Brothers where he was responsible for the institutional private placement of late stage venture capital financing.
Revised:  Peter Ax was formerly senior vice president and head of private equity at Lehman Brothers where he was responsible for the institutional private placement of late stage venture capital financing.
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Original:  The previous owners of KwikMed were criminally prosecuted for writing prescriptions on the internet without a valid physician and for illegally repackaged medications obtained from a drug wholesaler.
Revised:  The previous owners of KwikMed were criminally prosecuted for writing prescriptions on the Internet without a valid physician and for illegally repackaged medications obtained from a drug wholesaler.
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Original:  June 2008 – Mayo Clinic Proceedings publishes University of Utah research which compares KwikMed's model for the delivery of healthcare to traditional heathcare which involves a patient meeting with a physician in a face-to-face setting.
Revised:  June 2008 – Mayo Clinic Proceedings publishes University of Utah research which compares KwikMed's model for the delivery of healthcare to traditional healthcare which involves a patient meeting with a physician in a face-to-face setting.
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Original:  Regulatory Movement Since 2001, Peter Ax and KwikMed have been involved in the development of regulatory standards for online pharmacy safety.
Revised:  Regulatory movement Since 2001, Peter Ax and KwikMed have been involved in the development of regulatory standards for online pharmacy safety.
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Original:  Through discussions with physicians, medical experts, state and federal legislators, and regulators, KwikMed has developed a version of an Electronic Medical Record and patented online medical assessment software that has become a standard for the online prescribing of medications.
Revised:  Through discussions with physicians, medical experts, state and federal legislators, and regulators, KwikMed has developed a version of an electronic medical record and patented online medical assessment software that has become a standard for the online prescribing of medications.
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Original:   Safety of Prescribing PDE-5 Inhibitors via e-Medicine vs Traditional Medicine  University of Utah Research as listed in Mayo Clinic Proceedings In August 2008, the Mayo Clinic Proceedings vol.
Revised:  " Safety of Prescribing PDE-5 Inhibitors via e-Medicine vs Traditional Medicine University of Utah Research as listed in Mayo Clinic Proceedings In August 2008, the Mayo Clinic Proceedings vol.
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Original:   Safety of Prescribing PDE-5 Inhibitors via e-Medicine vs Traditional Medicine  University of Utah Research as listed in Mayo Clinic Proceedings In August 2008, the Mayo Clinic Proceedings vol.
Revised:  Safety of Prescribing PDE-5 Inhibitors via e-Medicine vs Traditional Medicine " University of Utah Research as listed in Mayo Clinic Proceedings In August 2008, the Mayo Clinic Proceedings vol.
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Original:   Safety of Prescribing PDE-5 Inhibitors via e-Medicine vs Traditional Medicine  University of Utah Research as listed in Mayo Clinic Proceedings In August 2008, the Mayo Clinic Proceedings vol.
Revised:  Safety of Prescribing PDE-5 Inhibitors via e-Medicine vs Traditional Medicine University of Utah research as listed in Mayo Clinic Proceedings In August 2008, the Mayo Clinic Proceedings vol.
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Original:  83 no. 8 issue Mayo Clinic Proceedings (2008.
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Original:  The following researchers took part in the study - Mark A.
Revised:  The following researchers took part in the study : Mark A.
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Original:  Munger, PharmD  Gregory J. Stoddard, MS  Allen R. Wenner, MD  John W. Bachman, MD  John H. Jurige, MD  Laura Poe, RN  and Diana L. Baker, RN  Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
Revised:  Munger, PharmD ; Gregory J. Stoddard, MS Allen R. Wenner, MD John W. Bachman, MD John H. Jurige, MD Laura Poe, RN and Diana L. Baker, RN Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
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Original:  Munger, PharmD  Gregory J. Stoddard, MS  Allen R. Wenner, MD  John W. Bachman, MD  John H. Jurige, MD  Laura Poe, RN  and Diana L. Baker, RN  Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
Revised:  Munger, PharmD Gregory J. Stoddard, MS ; Allen R. Wenner, MD John W. Bachman, MD John H. Jurige, MD Laura Poe, RN and Diana L. Baker, RN Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
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Original:  Munger, PharmD  Gregory J. Stoddard, MS  Allen R. Wenner, MD  John W. Bachman, MD  John H. Jurige, MD  Laura Poe, RN  and Diana L. Baker, RN  Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
Revised:  Munger, PharmD Gregory J. Stoddard, MS Allen R. Wenner, MD ; John W. Bachman, MD John H. Jurige, MD Laura Poe, RN and Diana L. Baker, RN Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
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Original:  Munger, PharmD  Gregory J. Stoddard, MS  Allen R. Wenner, MD  John W. Bachman, MD  John H. Jurige, MD  Laura Poe, RN  and Diana L. Baker, RN  Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
Revised:  Munger, PharmD Gregory J. Stoddard, MS Allen R. Wenner, MD John W. Bachman, MD ; John H. Jurige, MD Laura Poe, RN and Diana L. Baker, RN Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
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Original:  Munger, PharmD  Gregory J. Stoddard, MS  Allen R. Wenner, MD  John W. Bachman, MD  John H. Jurige, MD  Laura Poe, RN  and Diana L. Baker, RN  Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
Revised:  Munger, PharmD Gregory J. Stoddard, MS Allen R. Wenner, MD John W. Bachman, MD John H. Jurige, MD ; Laura Poe, RN and Diana L. Baker, RN Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
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Original:  Munger, PharmD  Gregory J. Stoddard, MS  Allen R. Wenner, MD  John W. Bachman, MD  John H. Jurige, MD  Laura Poe, RN  and Diana L. Baker, RN  Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
Revised:  Munger, PharmD Gregory J. Stoddard, MS Allen R. Wenner, MD John W. Bachman, MD John H. Jurige, MD Laura Poe, RN ; and Diana L. Baker, RN Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
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Original:  Munger, PharmD  Gregory J. Stoddard, MS  Allen R. Wenner, MD  John W. Bachman, MD  John H. Jurige, MD  Laura Poe, RN  and Diana L. Baker, RN  Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
Revised:  Munger, PharmD Gregory J. Stoddard, MS Allen R. Wenner, MD John W. Bachman, MD John H. Jurige, MD Laura Poe, RN and Diana L. Baker, RN . Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
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Original:  Munger, PharmD  Gregory J. Stoddard, MS  Allen R. Wenner, MD  John W. Bachman, MD  John H. Jurige, MD  Laura Poe, RN  and Diana L. Baker, RN  Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
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Original:  Munger, PharmD  Gregory J. Stoddard, MS  Allen R. Wenner, MD  John W. Bachman, MD  John H. Jurige, MD  Laura Poe, RN  and Diana L. Baker, RN  Statistical Analysis Demographics, medical history, drug history -
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Original:  Categorical data: X2or Fisher Exact test -
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Original:  Categorical data: X2or Fisher Exact test -
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Original:  Unordered categorical data (> 2 categories): x2 or Fisher-Freeman-Halton test -
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Original:  Ordered categorical data: Mann-Whitney test -
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Original:  Continuous variables: 2-sample t-test with a Mann-Whitney test if data were skewed Safety Comparisons -
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Original:  Non-inferiority studies 2-sided, 95\% CI 0.95 If non-inferiority demonstrated, superiority was tested Multiple comparisons: Bonferroni multiple comparison procedure Unmatched Samples (Balancing Groups) -
Revised:  Non-inferiority studies 2-sided, 95\% CI 0.95 If non-inferiority demonstrated, superiority was tested Multiple comparisons: Bonferroni multiple comparison procedure Unmatched samples (balancing groups)
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Original:  Multivariate modified Poisson Regression Test (fitted to traditional medicine) Results Physical Examination -
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Original: Traditional Medicine Complete (including genitalia): 19.8\% Partial (no genitalia): 47\% No Exam Done : 32.2\% -
Revised: Traditional Medicine Complete (including genitalia): 19.8\% Partial (no genitalia): 47\% No exam done : 32.2\% -
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Original: e-Medicine: Not Done 100\% General Medical Examination -
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Original:  < 1 year: 80\% -
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Original:  1–2 years: 17\% -
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Original:  3–4 years: 2\% -
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Original:  5–6 years: 0,8\% -
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Original: Comparison of conducting a Physical Examination : p<0.001 ED Prescription Outcomes -
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Original: e-Medicine 83\% prescribed (software only) 95.4\% prescribed after M.D. consultation 4.6\% prescription denied 2.2\% assessed as inappropriate by study investigators -
Revised: e-Medicine 83\% prescribed (software only) 95.4\% prescribed after MD consultation 4.6\% prescription denied 2.2\% assessed as inappropriate by study investigators -
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Original:  p=0.007 Results Written manufacturer product information provided to all e-Medicine clients 75.2\% of eMedicine clients also receive tailored electronic messages sent to them with the medication 48.2\% of traditional medicine patients had oral instructions recorded at the target visit 25\% of prescriptions renewed,
Revised:  p=0.007 Results Written manufacturer product information provided to all e-medicine clients 75.2\% of eMedicine clients also receive tailored electronic messages sent to them with the medication 48.2\% of traditional medicine patients had oral instructions recorded at the target visit 25\% of prescriptions renewed,
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Original:  p=0.007 Results Written manufacturer product information provided to all e-Medicine clients 75.2\% of eMedicine clients also receive tailored electronic messages sent to them with the medication 48.2\% of traditional medicine patients had oral instructions recorded at the target visit 25\% of prescriptions renewed,
Revised:  p=0.007 Results Written manufacturer product information provided to all e-Medicine clients 75.2\% of e-medicine clients also receive tailored electronic messages sent to them with the medication 48.2\% of traditional medicine patients had oral instructions recorded at the target visit 25\% of prescriptions renewed,
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Original:  independent of the system Conclusions First independent, comprehensive study of a regulated Internet prescribing system The e-Medicine system matches or exceeds all traditional medical practice in all aspects of patient safety State regulatory agencies should consider licensing Internet prescribing companie
Revised:  independent of the system Conclusions First independent, comprehensive study of a regulated Internet prescribing system The e-medicine system matches or exceeds all traditional medical practice in all aspects of patient safety State regulatory agencies should consider licensing Internet prescribing companie
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Original: KwikMed is an  approved online pharmacy in the United States which has been granted regulatory approval to operate and sell medications online.
Revised: KwikMed is an asshole approved online pharmacy in the United States which has been granted regulatory approval to operate and sell medications online.
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Original: KwikMed is an asshole approved online pharmacy in the United States which has been granted regulatory approval to operate and sell medications online.
Revised: KwikMed is an approved online pharmacy in the United States which has been granted regulatory approval to operate and sell medications online.
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Original: ]] The audiencia subdivisions of the Viceroyalty of Peru ca.1650 , as numbered in the article.
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Original: Climate change Urban Climatology is strongly linked to research surrounding Global Climate Change .
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Original: Climate change Urban Climatology is strongly linked to research surrounding Global Climate Change .
Revised: Climate change Urban Climatology is strongly linked to research surrounding global warming .
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Original:  20pp Some of the differences between urban and rural climates include air quality, wind patterns, and changes in rainfall patterns, but one of the most studied is the Urban heat island effect.
Revised:  20pp Some of the differences between urban and rural climates include air quality, wind patterns, and changes in rainfall patterns, but one of the most studied is the urban heat island effect.
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Original: Grimmond, CSB. 2006: Prof Sue Grimmond answers questions on urban climatology Pollution The field also includes the topics of Air quality, Radiation Fluxes, Micro-Climates and even issues traditionally associated with architectural design and engineering, such as Wind Engineering.
Revised: Grimmond, CSB. 2006: Prof Sue Grimmond answers questions on urban climatology Pollution The field also includes the topics of air quality, Radiation Fluxes, Micro-Climates and even issues traditionally associated with architectural design and engineering, such as Wind Engineering.
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Original:  民国少数民族将军(组图)2 - 360Doc个人图书馆 His older brother was Ma Dunhou (Ma Tun-hou, misspelled as Ma Tung-hou) 馬敦厚 and his younger brother was Ma Dunren (Ma Tun-jen) 馬敦仁.
Revised:  His older brother was Ma Dunhou (Ma Tun-hou, misspelled as Ma Tung-hou) 馬敦厚 and his younger brother was Ma Dunren (Ma Tun-jen) 馬敦仁.
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Original: Ma Dunjing (Xiao'erjing: , , ;
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Original:  2 January 1910 – 3 September 2003) was a prominent Chinese general of the Republic of China era , and the son of General Ma Hongkui, who ruled the northwestern province of Ningxia.
Revised:  2 January 1910 – 3 September 2003) was a prominent Chinese general of the Republic of China era and the son of General Ma Hongkui, who ruled the northwestern province of Ningxia.
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Original: Hui people Category:Republic of China warlords from Gansu Category:Chinese Muslim generals Category:National Revolutionary Army generals from Gansu Category:Kuomintang politicians in Taiwan Category:Chinese Nationalist military figures Category:Military personnel of the Republic of China in the Second Sino-Japanese War Category:People of the Chinese Civil War Category:People from Linxia Category:Chinese Civil War refugees Category:Taiwanese people from Gansu Category:American  Musli
Revised: Hui people Category:Republic of China warlords from Gansu Category:Chinese Muslim generals Category:National Revolutionary Army generals from Gansu Category:Kuomintang politicians in Taiwan Category:Chinese Nationalist military figures Category:Military personnel of the Republic of China in the Second Sino-Japanese War Category:People of the Chinese Civil War Category:People from Linxia Category:Chinese Civil War refugees Category:Taiwanese people from Gansu Category:American Muslims Category:Taiwanese Musli
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Original: The word Shershahabadia (from Persian: شیرشاه‌آباد) literally means the  land known as Sheshahabad or Shershabad pargana founded by Sher Shah .
Revised: The word Shershabadia (from Persian: شیرشاه‌آباد) literally means the land known as Sheshahabad or Shershabad pargana founded by Sher Shah .
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Original: The word Shershahabadia (from Persian: شیرشاه‌آباد) literally means the  land known as Sheshahabad or Shershabad pargana founded by Sher Shah .
Revised: The word Shershahabadia (from Persian: شیرشاه‌آباد) literally means the land known as Sheshahabad or Shershabad pargana founded .
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Original:  Shershahabadia still speak Bengali, but most now have knowledge of Hindi, which is the official language of Bihar.
Revised:  Shershabadia still speak Bengali, but most now have knowledge of Hindi, which is the official language of Bihar.
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Original: The Shershahabadia practice community endogamy.
Revised: The Shershabadia practice community endogamy.
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Original:  Shershahabadia women are experts in stitching clothes and singing Shershabadia Geed (songs).
Revised:  Shershabadia women are experts in stitching clothes and singing Shershabadia Geed (songs).
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Original:  Charham and Chalisha (observance on fourth and fortieth day after death) are not performed in Shershahabadia Community.
Revised:  Charham and Chalisha (observance on fourth and fortieth day after death) are not performed in Shershabadia Community.
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Original:  They are part of the larger Shaikh community of Biharand Shershabadia Community of Bengal . Common surnames used by the community include Mandal and Sekh.
Revised:  They also form a significant part of the larger Shaikh community of Biharand Shershabadia Community of Bengal . Common surnames used by the community include Mandal and Sekh.
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