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Original: On Saturday 10 December 2005, Tony Benn spoke to around 1,500 people at the opening rally of a peace conference at the Royal Horticultural Hall in London organised by the Stop the War Coalition in opposition to what it claims is the illegal an immoral occupation of Iraq.
Revised: On Saturday 10 December 2005, Tony Benn spoke to around 1,500 people at the opening rally of a peace conference at the Royal Horticultural Hall in London organised by the Stop the War Coalition in opposition to the occupation of Iraq.
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Original:  Among these was Cindy Sheehan, the American anti-war activist whose son  died in Iraq and who is famous for camping outside George Bush's ranch in Texas .
Revised:  Among these was Cindy Sheehan, American anti-war activist whose son died in Iraq and who is famous for camping outside George Bush's ranch in Texas .
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Original:  Among these was Cindy Sheehan, the American anti-war activist whose son  died in Iraq and who is famous for camping outside George Bush's ranch in Texas .
Revised:  Among these was Cindy Sheehan, the American anti-war activist whose son died in Iraq .
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Original:  George Galloway the Respect MP closed the conference in which he urged people to build for a planned international demonstration on 18 March next year
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Original:  Wind speeds of a peak of sixty , or ninety-six , had been reported .
Revised:  Wind speeds of a peak of sixty , or ninety-six , had been repoed .
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Original:   A Twitter account representing the Indiana Statea Fair confirmed the fatalities and stated that their "prayers are with the families of all affected".
Revised:  A Twitter account representing the Indiana State Fair confirmed the fatalities and stated that their "prayers are with the families of all affected".
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Original: Captain Brad Weaver, an Indiana State Police employee, described witnessing "the framework from the stage start to come over" and claimed that the incident was unable to be prevented.
Revised: Captain Brad Weaver, an employee, described witnessing "the framework from the stage start to come over" and claimed that the incident was unable to be prevented.
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Original: Captain Brad Weaver, an Indiana State Police employee, described witnessing "the framework from the stage start to come over" and claimed that the incident was unable to be prevented.
Revised: Captain Brad Weaver, an Indiana State Police employee, described witnessing "the framework from the stage start to come over" and claimed that the incident was unable to have been prevented.
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Original:  At the time of the incident -  2100 or 0000 today - US country music band were about to perform.
Revised:  At the time of the incident - approximately 2100 or 0000 today - US country music band were about to perform.
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Original:  The Indianapolis has attributed the incident to poor weather;
Revised:  has attributed the incident to poor weather;
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Original: At least four people have died and forty have been injured as the result of a stage collapsing at the , located within the  state of Indiana in the US . has attributed the incident to poor weather ;
Revised: At least four people died and forty have been injured as the result of a stage collapsing at the , located within the state of Indiana in the US . has attributed the incident to poor weather ;
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Original: At least four people have died and forty have been injured as the result of a stage collapsing at the , located within the  state of Indiana in the US . has attributed the incident to poor weather ;
Revised: At least four people have died and forty have been injured as the result of a stage collapsing at the , located within the US state of Indiana in the US . has attributed the incident to poor weather ;
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Original: At least four people have died and forty have been injured as the result of a stage collapsing at the , located within the  state of Indiana in the US . has attributed the incident to poor weather ;
Revised: At least four people have died and forty have been injured as the result of a stage collapsing at the , located within the state of Indiana . has attributed the incident to poor weather ;
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Original:  Wind speeds of a peak of sixty , or ninety-six , had been repoed .  Captain Brad Weaver, an employee, described witnessing "the framework from the stage start to come over", having given a public safety announcement shortly prior  . Numerous patients, both adults and children, have been admitted to hospital.
Revised:  Wind speeds of a peak of sixty , or ninety-six , had been repoed . Captain Brad Weaver, an employee, described witnessing "the framework from the stage start to come over", having given a public safety announcement shortly prior to the collapse . Numerous patients, both adults and children, have been admitted to hospital.
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Original:  Wind speeds of a peak of sixty , or ninety-six , had been repoed .  Captain Brad Weaver, an employee, described witnessing "the framework from the stage start to come over", having given a public safety announcement shortly prior  . Numerous patients, both adults and children, have been admitted to hospital.
Revised:  Wind speeds of a peak of sixty , or ninety-six , had been repoed . Captain Brad Weaver, an employee, described witnessing "the framework from the stage start to come over", having given a public safety announcement shortly prior . Numerous patients, including adults and children, have been admitted to hospital.
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Original:  Weaver claimed that the incident was unable to have been prevented.
Revised:  Weaver claimed that the incident could not have been prevented.
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Original:  Chris described the incident as "the worst thing I have witnessed in my life."
Revised:  He described the incident as "the worst thing I have witnessed in my life."
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Original:  Freeing trapped victims from underneath the wreckage took rescue workers below twenty minutes, according to Lindquist.
Revised:  Freeing trapped victims from underneath the wreckage took rescue workers under twenty minutes, according to Lindquist.
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Original:  At the time of the incident - approximately 2100  or 0000 today - US country music band were about to perform.
Revised:  At the time of the incident — approximately 2100 or 0000 today - US country music band were about to perform.
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Original:  Band members and spoke out after the accident , on social networking website Twitter.
Revised:  Band members and spoke out after the accident on social networking website Twitter.
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Original:  In a tweet, Bareilles said she was "speechless" and felt "hopeless" in the aftermath of the situation.
Revised:  Bareilles said she was "speechless" and felt "hopeless" in the aftermath of the situation.
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Original:  My heart aches for the lives lost ," Bareilles tweeted
Revised:  My heart aches for the lives lost .
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Original:  They are not thought to have sustained life-threatening injuries.
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Original: A police social media initiative has sensationally backfired, placing the trial of an alleged child killer in jeopardy.
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Original:  “Hope he rots in jail” was one such comment, while others labelled the accused as “evil” and “a monster”.
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Original:  Several comments had to be deleted from the page by police, with some naming who they believed to be the accused, and speculating on the possible sentence.
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Original:  ” The comments initiated after police on Saturday arrested and charged a 41-year-old man with one count each of murder, deprivation of Liberty , child stealing, indecent treatment of a child under 16  and interfering with a corpse .
Revised:  ” Police have charged the suspect with murder, deprivation of Liberty , child stealing, indecent treatment of a child under 16 and interfering with a corpse .
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Original:  ” The comments initiated after police on Saturday arrested and charged a 41-year-old man with one count each of murder, deprivation of Liberty , child stealing, indecent treatment of a child under 16  and interfering with a corpse .
Revised:  ” The comments initiated after police on Saturday arrested and charged a 41-year-old man with one count each of murder, deprivation of liberty , child stealing, indecent treatment of a child under 16 and interfering with a corpse .
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Original:  ” The comments initiated after police on Saturday arrested and charged a 41-year-old man with one count each of murder, deprivation of Liberty , child stealing, indecent treatment of a child under 16  and interfering with a corpse .
Revised:  ” The comments initiated after police on Saturday arrested and charged a 41-year-old man with one count each of murder, deprivation of Liberty , child stealing, indecent treatment of a child under 16 , and interfering with a corpse .
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Original:  ” The comments initiated after police on Saturday arrested and charged a 41-year-old man with one count each of murder, deprivation of Liberty , child stealing, indecent treatment of a child under 16  and interfering with a corpse .
Revised:  ” The comments initiated after police on Saturday arrested and charged a 41-year-old man with one count each of murder, deprivation of Liberty , child stealing, indecent treatment of a child under 16 and interfering with a corpse 
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Original:  They have signalled their intention to step up the search for Daniel’s body, with the aim of ending the largest missing person case in Queensland’s history
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Original: Two men have been admitted to hospital after a shooting incident in Glasgow, in the south of Scotland.
Revised: Two men have been admitted to hospital after a shooting incident in Glasgow, Scotland.
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Original:  One 27-year-old man had been impacted with a gunshot while a second  was left severely injured after a disturbance outside a residence in the district of the city, which occurred at approximately 0245 (0145 ) this morning.
Revised:  One 27-year-old man suffered a gunshot wound while a second was left severely injured after a disturbance outside a residence in the district of the city, which occurred at approximately 0245 (0145 ) this morning.
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Original:  One 27-year-old man had been impacted with a gunshot while a second  was left severely injured after a disturbance outside a residence in the district of the city, which occurred at approximately 0245 (0145 ) this morning.
Revised:  One 27-year-old man had been impacted with a gunshot while a second man was left severely injured after a disturbance outside a residence in the district of the city, which occurred at approximately 0245 (0145 ) this morning.
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Original:  The two gentlemen were transported to in .
Revised:  The two men were transported to in .
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Original:  Meanwhile , the second victim is currently recovering from his injuries in the district of Glasgow.
Revised:  Meanwhile the second victim is currently recovering from his injuries in the district of Glasgow.
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Original:  Meanwhile , the second victim is currently recovering from his injuries in the district of Glasgow.
Revised:  Meanwhile , the second victim is in in the district of Glasgow.
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Original:  His condition is said to be critical , as it stands . Police, who are now examining the background of the incident, have asked people who know any information to contact them.
Revised:  His condition is said to be critical . Police, who are now examining the background of the incident, have asked people who know any information to contact them.
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Original:  His condition is said to be critical , as it stands . Police, who are now examining the background of the incident, have asked people who know any information to contact them.
Revised:  His condition is said to be critical , as it stands . Police, who are now examining the background of the incident, have asked people with any information to contact them.
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Original:  They have also increased the amount of security in the region.
Revised:  They have also increased patrols in the region.
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Original:  According to one spokesperson: "Police are currently making door-to-door enquiries and speaking with members of the local community to identify the injured man and establish the exact circumstances surrounding this incident.
Revised:  According to a spokesperson: "Police are currently making door-to-door enquiries and speaking with members of the local community to identify the injured man and establish the exact circumstances surrounding this incident.
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Original: In , the capital city of Northern Ireland , a double-decker bus has overturned . Approximately thirty people have been left injured as a result of the road traffic collision near , located close to the centre of the city , which occurred at around 1415 (1315 ) today.
Revised: A double-decker bus has overturned in , the capital city of Northern Ireland , a double-decker bus has overturned . Approximately thirty people have been left injured as a result of the road traffic collision near , located close to the centre of the city , which occurred at around 1415 (1315 ) today.
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Original: In , the capital city of Northern Ireland , a double-decker bus has overturned . Approximately thirty people have been left injured as a result of the road traffic collision near , located close to the centre of the city , which occurred at around 1415 (1315 ) today.
Revised: In , the capital city of Northern Ireland . Approximately thirty people have been left injured as a result of the road traffic collision near , located close to the centre of the city , which occurred at around 1415 (1315 ) today.
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Original: In , the capital city of Northern Ireland , a double-decker bus has overturned . Approximately thirty people have been left injured as a result of the road traffic collision near , located close to the centre of the city , which occurred at around 1415 (1315 ) today.
Revised: In , the capital city of Northern Ireland , a double-decker bus has overturned . Approximately thirty people have been left injured as a result of the road traffic collision near , located close to the centre of the city . The incident occurred at around 1415 (1315 ) today.
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Original:  According to ambulance service spokesperson John McPoland, " t he vast majority of those on the bus are being taken to hospital by ambulance ".
Revised:  According to ambulance service spokesperson John McPoland, " he vast majority of those on the bus are being taken to hospital by ambulance ".
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Original:  According to ambulance service spokesperson John McPoland, " t he vast majority of those on the bus are being taken to hospital by ambulance ".
Revised:  According to ambulance service spokesperson John McPoland, " t The vast majority of those on the bus are being taken to hospital by ambulance ".
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Original:  Probably the driver is the most seriously injured and he's been taken to the , but it's not expected his injuries are life-threatening." BREAKING NEWS A BOMB HAS STRUCK BELFAST The driver of the bus was extracted from the wreckage with the use of cutting equipment.
Revised:  Probably the driver is the most seriously injured and he's been taken to the , but it's not expected his injuries are life-threatening." The driver of the bus was extracted from the wreckage with the use of cutting equipment.
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Original: At least twenty people have been reported killed in two days of attacks by the Syrian military on the northern port city of , with both ships of the and ground forces involved .
Revised: At least twenty people have been killed in two days of attacks by the Syrian military on the northern port city of , with both ships of the and ground forces involved .
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Original: At least twenty people have been reported killed in two days of attacks by the Syrian military on the northern port city of , with both ships of the and ground forces involved .
Revised: At least twenty people have been reported killed in two days of attacks by the Syrian and ground forces on the northern port city of , with both ships of the and ground forces involved .
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Original:  The total death toll is unclear, with at least two and as many as five people reported dead on Saturday and estimates of the death tool on Sunday ranging from at least nineteen, according to the , to at least 21 , according to
Revised:  The total death toll is unclear, with at least two and as many as five people reported dead on Saturday and estimates of the death toll on Sunday ranging from at least nineteen, according to the , to at least 21 , according to
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Original:  Among those kiled are three children, two women and one man.
Revised:  Among those killed are three children, two women and one man.
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Original:  In the aftermath of a multiple stabbing scenario at Upper Midvale Road, police were informed of events at approximately 1500 (1400 ) yesterday.
Revised:  In the aftermath of a multiple-stabbing scenario at Upper Midvale Road, police were informed of events at approximately 1500 (1400 ) yesterday.
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Original:  At , a man has been detained until police custody and is residing in the hospital until he recovers from surgery.
Revised:  At , a man has been detained under police custody and is residing in the hospital until he recovers from surgery.
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Original:  At , a man has been detained until police custody and is residing in the hospital until he recovers from surgery.
Revised:  At , a man has been detained until police custody and will remain in the hospital until he recovers from surgery.
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Original:  The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people," according to Gull  ] 
Revised:  The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people," according to Gull . He said that " ] 
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Original:  The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people," according to Gull  ] 
Revised:  The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people," according to Gull d] 
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Original:  The victims have remained unidentified , but were all Jersey residents.
Revised:  The victims have remained unidentified but were all Jersey residents.
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Original:  He said that "[d]ealing with multiple deaths of men, women and particularly young children" unsettled members of the emergency services but nevertheless remained "tremendously professional".
Revised:  He said that "[d]ealing with multiple deaths of men, women and particularly young children" unsettled members of the emergency services , but they nevertheless remained "tremendously professional".
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Original:  Numerous witnesses have contacted police in relation to the incident and are now being interviewed by them . Police, who are attempting to identify the dead, are currently at the scene alongside forensic investigators and detectives
Revised:  Numerous witnesses have contacted police in relation to the incident and are now being interviewed . Police, who are attempting to identify the dead, are currently at the scene alongside forensic investigators and detectives
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Original:  As it stands, police are not looking for any other individuals in relation to the events.
Revised:  As it stands, police are not looking for any other individual in relation to the events.
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Original: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " this complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened . " The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people , " according to Gull.
Revised: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " This complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened . " The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people , " according to Gull.
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Original: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " this complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened . " The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people , " according to Gull.
Revised: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " this complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened , " The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people , " according to Gull.
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Original: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " this complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened . " The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people , " according to Gull.
Revised: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " this complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened . " and that the police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people , " according to Gull.
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Original: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " this complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened . " The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people , " according to Gull.
Revised: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " this complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened . " The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people . " according to Gull.
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