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Original:  Hours later in Peshawar, officials say an attacker in a parked car threw a grenade at a crowd of people outside the Askari Bank before exploding in the car.
Revised:  Hours later in Peshawar, officials say an attacker in a parked car threw a grenade at a crowd of people outside the Askari Bank before detonating a bomb in his car.
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Original:  No one has claimed responsibility for that  attack.
Revised:  No one has claimed responsibility for that particular attack.
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Original:  The US Embassy in Pakistan released a statement in which it condemned the bombings.
Revised:  The U.S. Embassy in Pakistan released a statement in which it condemned the bombings.
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Original:  We are on the front line today, that's why our blood is being shed , " he said , adding that forty suspected would-be suicide bombers had been apprehended within the past several months.
Revised:  We are on the front line today, that's why our blood is being shed . " he said , adding that forty suspected would-be suicide bombers had been apprehended within the past several months.
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Original:  Renault team also loosed two sponsors this week ING Group and Mutua Madrileña   .
Revised:  Renault team also loosed two sponsors this week ING Group and Mutua Madrileña . .
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Original: Vodafone McLaren Mercedes driver Lewis Hamilton won the FIA 2009 Formula One SingTel Singapore Grand Prix on the street circuit at Marina Bay, Singapore.
Revised: McLaren driver Lewis Hamilton won the FIA 2009 Formula One SingTel Singapore Grand Prix on the street circuit at Marina Bay, Singapore.
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Original: Vodafone McLaren Mercedes driver Lewis Hamilton won the FIA 2009 Formula One SingTel Singapore Grand Prix on the street circuit at Marina Bay, Singapore.
Revised: Vodafone McLaren Mercedes driver Lewis Hamilton won the FIA 2009 Formula One Grand Prix at the street circuit at Marina Bay, Singapore.
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Original:  Toyota driver Timo Glock finished second after starting 7th . Previous Singapore GP winner Fernando Alonso closed the podium for Renault starting one place above Glock.
Revised:  Toyota driver Timo Glock took second place after starting seventh . Previous Singapore GP winner Fernando Alonso closed the podium for Renault starting one place above Glock.
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Original:  Toyota driver Timo Glock finished second after starting 7th . Previous Singapore GP winner Fernando Alonso closed the podium for Renault starting one place above Glock.
Revised:  Toyota driver Timo Glock finished second after starting 7th . Previous Singapore GP winner Fernando Alonso closed the podium for Renault having started one place ahead of Glock.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel made it fourth for Red Bull after having trouble with brakes that also caused his teammate Mark Webber to crash hard his car's rear and both Toro Rosso cars to retire.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel took fourth for Red Bull after having trouble with brakes that also caused his teammate Mark Webber to crash hard his car's rear and both Toro Rosso cars to retire.
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Original: Sebastian Vettel came in fourth for Red Bull after having trouble with brakes that also caused his teammate Mark Webber to crash hard his car's rear and both Toro Rosso cars to retire . Vettel was chased by both Brawn's of Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello, the  leaders of this season.
Revised: Sebastian Vettel came in fourth for Red Bull after having trouble with brakes that also caused his teammate Mark Webber to crash hard his car's rear and both Toro Rosso cars to retire . Vettel was chased by both Brawns of Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello, the leaders of this season.
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Original: Sebastian Vettel came in fourth for Red Bull after having trouble with brakes that also caused his teammate Mark Webber to crash hard his car's rear and both Toro Rosso cars to retire . Vettel was chased by both Brawn's of Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello, the  leaders of this season.
Revised: Sebastian Vettel came in fourth for Red Bull after having trouble with brakes that also caused his teammate Mark Webber to crash hard his car's rear and both Toro Rosso cars to retire . Vettel was chased by both Brawn's of Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello, the current leaders of this season.
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Original:  Hamilton's teammate Heikki Kovalainen came 7th for McLaren.
Revised:  Hamilton's teammate Heikki Kovalainen secured seventh place for McLaren.
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Original:  Top eight was closed by Robert Kubica from BMW Sauber.
Revised:  The top eight was closed by Robert Kubica from BMW Sauber.
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Original:  Top eight was closed by Robert Kubica from BMW Sauber.
Revised:  Top eight was closed by Robert Kubica of BMW Sauber.
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Original:  On Monday this week we saw a conclusion of the so-called "crashgate" around Renault team as World Motor Sport Council ruled out a two-year suspended sentence for the team .
Revised:  On Monday this week we saw a conclusion of the "crashgate" around Renault team as World Motor Sport Council ruled out a two-year suspended sentence for the team .
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Original:  On Monday this week we saw a conclusion of the so-called "crashgate" around Renault team as World Motor Sport Council ruled out a two-year suspended sentence for the team .
Revised:  On Monday this week we saw a conclusion of the so-called "crashgate" scandal around Renault, as the World Motor Sport Council ruled out a two-year suspended sentence for the team .
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Original:  On Monday this week we saw a conclusion of the so-called "crashgate" around Renault team as World Motor Sport Council ruled out a two-year suspended sentence for the team .
Revised:  On Monday this week we saw a conclusion of the so-called "crashgate" around Renault team as World Motor Sport Council gave the team a two-year suspended sentence for the team .
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Original:   Renault team also loosed two sponsors this week  ING Group and Mutua Madrileña.
Revised:  The Renault team also loosed two sponsors this week ING Group and Mutua Madrileña.
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Original:   Renault team also loosed two sponsors this week  ING Group and Mutua Madrileña.
Revised:  Renault team also lost two sponsors this week ING Group and Mutua Madrileña.
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Original:   Renault team also loosed two sponsors this week  ING Group and Mutua Madrileña.
Revised:  Renault team also loosed two sponsors this week : ING Group and Mutua Madrileña.
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Original:   Jenson Button still leads the Championship with 84 points as well as his team, Brawn scores 153 so far . Button's teammate Barrichello is 15 points behind  . Vettel is 10 points behind Barrichello and is the only competitor from the other team who remains mathematical chances to win the championship.
Revised:  Jenson Button still leads the Championship with 84 points . Button's teammate Barrichello is 15 points behind . Vettel is 10 points behind Barrichello and is the only competitor from the other team who remains mathematical chances to win the championship.
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Original:   Jenson Button still leads the Championship with 84 points as well as his team, Brawn scores 153 so far . Button's teammate Barrichello is 15 points behind  . Vettel is 10 points behind Barrichello and is the only competitor from the other team who remains mathematical chances to win the championship.
Revised:  Jenson Button still leads the Championship with 84 points as well as his team, Brawn scores 153 so far . Button's teammate Barrichello is 15 points behind . Vettel is 10 points behind Barrichello and is the only competitor from another team who has a mathematical chance to win the championship.
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Original:  Red Bull is 42.5 and other teams more than 90 points behind Brawn.
Revised:  Red Bull are 42.5 and other teams more than 90 points behind Brawn.
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Original: On Monday this week we saw a conclusion of the "crashgate" scandal around Renault, as the World Motor Sport Council gave the team a two-year suspended ban.
Revised:  Monday this week we saw a conclusion of the "crashgate" scandal around Renault, as the World Motor Sport Council gave the team a two-year suspended ban.
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Original: On Monday this week we saw a conclusion of the "crashgate" scandal around Renault, as the World Motor Sport Council gave the team a two-year suspended ban.
Revised: On Monday this week saw a conclusion of the "crashgate" scandal around Renault, as the World Motor Sport Council gave the team a two-year suspended ban.
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Original:  There is no word on when US forces and Iraqi commandos made the joint arrest or any details on the suspect  .
Revised:  US forces and Iraqi commandos made the joint arrest or any details on the suspect .
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Original:  The US military also did not state in their anouncement how they identified the suspect may be responsible.
Revised:  The US military did not state in their anouncement how they identified the suspect may be responsible.
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Original:  According to Chelsea Carter writing for the Associated Pres , the slaying of the taekwondo team "became one of the symbols of Iraq's lawlessness during its worse years of sectarian violence.
Revised:  According to Chelsea Carter writing for the Associated Press , the slaying of the taekwondo team "became one of the symbols of Iraq's lawlessness during its worse years of sectarian violence.
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Original: Officials in Iraq have anounced the arrest in Anbar of a man suspected abducting of killing all fifteen members of the national taekwondo team.
Revised: Officials in Iraq have anounced the arrest in Anbar of a man suspected of abducting and killing all fifteen members of the national taekwondo team.
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Original:  The team was traveling in convoy towrds Jordan to attend a training camp when they were stopped by gunmen.
Revised:  The team was traveling in convoy towards Jordan to attend a training camp when they were stopped by gunmen.
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Original:  The attack occured near Khalidiyah between Fallujah and Ramadi.
Revised:  The attack occurred near Khalidiyah between Fallujah and Ramadi.
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Original:  US forces and Iraqi commandos made the joint arrest on Spetember 24 and it was anounced today .
Revised:  US forces and Iraqi commandos made the joint arrest on September 24 and it was anounced today .
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Original:  The US military did not state in their anouncement how they identified the suspect may be responsible . Victims' relatives have said they are pleased at the news.
Revised:  The US military did not state in their announcement how they identified the suspect may be responsible . Victims' relatives have said they are pleased at the news.
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Original:  The US military did not state in their anouncement how they identified the suspect may be responsible . Victims' relatives have said they are pleased at the news.
Revised:  The US military did not state in their anouncement how they identified the suspect . Victims' relatives have said they are pleased at the news.
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Original:  Sportsplayers and officials were regularly targeted by insurgants in 2006 and 2007.
Revised:  Sportsplayers and officials were regularly targeted by insurgents in 2006 and 2007.
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Original: Officials in Iraq have anounced the arrest in Anbar of a man suspected of abducting and killing all fifteen members of the national taekwondo team.
Revised: Officials in Iraq have announced the arrest in Anbar of a man suspected of abducting and killing all fifteen members of the national taekwondo team.
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Original:  The 1 billionith application, or app, was downloaded in April 2009 and the 1.5 billionith app was downloaded in July.
Revised:  The 1 billionth application, or app, was downloaded in April 2009 and the 1.5 billionith app was downloaded in July.
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Original:  The 1 billionith application, or app, was downloaded in April 2009 and the 1.5 billionith app was downloaded in July.
Revised:  The 1 billionith application, or app, was downloaded in April 2009 and the 1.5 billionth app was downloaded in July.
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Original:  There are over 125,000 developers in the iPhone Developer Programme .
Revised:  There are over 125,000 developers in the iPhone Developer Program .
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Original: On Monday, the iPhone was also voted the number 1 "coolest and most desirable brand of 2009" in a CoolBrands survey, knocking former leader Aston Martin off the top spot, after it being at the top for three years running .
Revised: On Monday, the iPhone was also voted the number 1 "coolest brand of 2009" in a CoolBrands survey, knocking former leader Aston Martin off the top spot, after it being at the top for three years running .
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Original: On Monday, the iPhone was also voted the number 1 "coolest and most desirable brand of 2009" in a CoolBrands survey, knocking former leader Aston Martin off the top spot, after it being at the top for three years running .
Revised: On Monday, the iPhone was also voted the number 1 "coolest and most desirable brand of 2009" in a CoolBrands survey, causing former leader of three years Aston Martin to lose the number 1 position .
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Original: Mobile operator Orange has announced it will soon be selling Apple's iPhone in the United Kingdon .
Revised: Mobile operator Orange has announced it will soon be selling Apple's iPhone in the United Kingdom .
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Original:  The newest iPhone 3GS has also been selling well, with some stores having trouble keeping up with demand    
Revised:  The newest iPhone 3GS has also been selling well, with some stores having trouble keeping up with demand . 
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Original:  Although AT&T still have sole rights to sell the iPhone in the United States, most other markets already have multiple providers  
Revised:  Although AT&T still have sole rights to sell the iPhone in the United States, most other markets already have multiple providers . 
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Original: O2 certainly didn't seem to have sour grapes, acknowledging that its exclusive position was only ever "for a limited period of time".
Revised: O2 certainly didn't seem to have sour grapes, acknowledging that its exclusive position was only "for a limited period of time".
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Original: World leaders at the G8 Meeting at Gleneagles have made statements following the bomb attacks in London today.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Norwegian King Harald telexed Queen Elisabeth II: It was with great sorrow I recieved the shocking news about the horrible incidents that happened in London this morning, that have injured and claimed the lives of innocent humans" Prime minister Kjell Magne Bondevik urges that the war on terror have to continue: "We cannot let ourself get scared, that would be to give the terrorists the victory.
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Original: Prime Minister Dr Manmohan Singh of India expressed outrage at terrorist attacks in London, saying these only  underscore our contention that terrorism is a global phenomenon that needed to be tackled with concerted effort.
Revised: Prime Minister Dr Manmohan Singh of India expressed outrage at terrorist attacks in London, saying these only " underscore our contention that terrorism is a global phenomenon that needed to be tackled with concerted effort.
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Original:   Recalling that India was the victim of a terrorist attack only two days ago when heavily armed men assaulted a shrine at Ayodhya before being killed, Dr Singh said the incidents demonstrated that  global terrorism does not respect international boundaries and we all need to work together to counter it 
Revised:  " Recalling that India was the victim of a terrorist attack only two days ago when heavily armed men assaulted a shrine at Ayodhya before being killed, Dr Singh said the incidents demonstrated that global terrorism does not respect international boundaries and we all need to work together to counter it 
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Original:   Recalling that India was the victim of a terrorist attack only two days ago when heavily armed men assaulted a shrine at Ayodhya before being killed, Dr Singh said the incidents demonstrated that  global terrorism does not respect international boundaries and we all need to work together to counter it 
Revised:  Recalling that India was the victim of a terrorist attack only two days ago when heavily armed men assaulted a shrine at Ayodhya before being killed, Dr Singh said the incidents demonstrated that " global terrorism does not respect international boundaries and we all need to work together to counter it 
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Original:   Recalling that India was the victim of a terrorist attack only two days ago when heavily armed men assaulted a shrine at Ayodhya before being killed, Dr Singh said the incidents demonstrated that  global terrorism does not respect international boundaries and we all need to work together to counter it 
Revised:  Recalling that India was the victim of a terrorist attack only two days ago when heavily armed men assaulted a shrine at Ayodhya before being killed, Dr Singh said the incidents demonstrated that global terrorism does not respect international boundaries and we all need to work together to counter it ."
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Original: Queen Elizabeth II of the United Kingdom offered this official statement following the attacks: The dreadful events in London this morning have deeply shocked us all.
Revised: Elizabeth Windsor offered this official statement following the attacks: The dreadful events in London this morning have deeply shocked us all.
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Original:  The President of Serbia and Montenegro, Svetozar Marović, sent his condolences to Queen Elizabeth II and Tony Blair, and expressed solidarity of citizens of Serbia and Montenegro with the British people: We are stunned by this tragedy and new recklessness of terrorists towards free and civilized countries and their citizens.
Revised:  The President of Serbia and Montenegro, Svetozar Marović, sent his condolences to Elizabeth Windsor and Tony Blair, and expressed solidarity of citizens of Serbia and Montenegro with the British people: We are stunned by this tragedy and new recklessness of terrorists towards free and civilized countries and their citizens.
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Original:  The contrast couldn ’ t be clearer between the hearts of those who care about human liberty and those who would take the lives of innocent folks.
Revised:  The contrast couldn ' t be clearer between the hearts of those who care about human liberty and those who would take the lives of innocent folks.
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Original:  The Norwegian King Harald telexed Queen Elisabeth II: It was with great sorrow I recieved the shocking news about the horrible incidents that happened in London this morning, that have injured and claimed the lives of innocent humans" Prime minister Kjell Magne Bondevik urges that the war on terror have to continue: "We cannot let ourself get scared, that would be to give the terrorists the victory.
Revised:  The Norwegian King Harald telexed Queen Elisabeth II: It was with great sorrow I received the shocking news about the horrible incidents that happened in London this morning, that have injured and claimed the lives of innocent humans" Prime minister Kjell Magne Bondevik urges that the war on terror have to continue: "We cannot let ourself get scared, that would be to give the terrorists the victory.
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Original:  Officials believe the insurgents in Pakistan's tribal regions have ties to the Taliban and al-Qaida and use the area as a base of operations for strikes in Afghanistan against foreign troops
Revised:  Officials believe the insurgents in Pakistan's tribal regions have ties to the Taleban and al-Qaeda and use the area as a base of operations for strikes in Afghanistan against foreign troops
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Original: The Afghan government blamed the Taleban for the latest attack outside the southern city of Kandahar.
Revised: The Afghan government blamed the Taliban for the latest attack outside the southern city of Kandahar.
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Original:  August was this year's deadliest month, as the Taleban sought to discourage people from voting in the presidential election.
Revised:  August was this year's deadliest month, as the Taliban sought to discourage people from voting in the presidential election.
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Original:  Officials believe the insurgents in Pakistan's tribal regions have ties to the Taleban and al-Qaeda and use the area as a base of operations for strikes in Afghanistan against foreign troops
Revised:  Officials believe the insurgents in Pakistan's tribal regions have ties to the Taliban and al-Qaeda and use the area as a base of operations for strikes in Afghanistan against foreign troops
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Original:  In 2002 he hit headlines after almost dying after eating a pretzel, in 2003 when he fell off a Segway, and in 2004 when he fell off a mountain bike  
Revised:  In 2002 he hit headlines after almost dying after eating a pretzel, in 2003 when he fell off a Segway, and in 2004 when he fell off a mountain bike . 
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Original:  In 2002 he hit headlines after almost dying after eating a pretzel, in 2003 when he fell off a Segway, and in 2004 when he fell off a mountain bike
Revised:  In 2002 he hit headlines after almost dying after eating a pretzel, in 2003 when he fell off a Segway, and in 2004 he fell off a mountain bike
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Original: The officer had to be taken to  hospital having suffered a twisted ankle whilst Mr. Bush, who was wearing a helmet, only suffered minor bruises despite landing on asphalt.
Revised: The officer had to be taken to the hospital having suffered a twisted ankle whilst Mr. Bush, who was wearing a helmet, only suffered minor bruises despite landing on asphalt.
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Original:   How many teams are participating?
Revised:  KS: How many teams are participating?
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Original:   Who are the defending champions?
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Original:   Are teams full 18 player teams?
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Original:   Who are the sponsors of this event?
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Original:   Are there any plans to have a competition similar to that of the NFL (with six or seven teams) in the future  
Revised:  Are there any plans to have a competition similar to that of the NFL (with six or seven teams) in the future ? 
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Original:   Are there any plans to have a competition similar to that of the NFL (with six or seven teams) in the future  
Revised:  Are there any plans to have a competition similar to that of the NFL (with six or seven teams) in the future RM
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Original:  Kevin Smith:  KS:     How many teams are participating?
Revised:  Kevin Smith: KS: It's important to have a full size field when fielding full squads, and given the fact that the games will take place over the two days this weekend, it's very important, when considering a site, that it be able to accommodate multiple full-size pitches. How many teams are participating?
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Original:  KS:  Rich Mann: RM 
Revised:  KS: Rich Mann: RM : Possibly, still in early stages of strategic plannin
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Original: 200px|Australian rules football field messurements Are there suitable sized fields at this location?
Revised:  Are there suitable sized fields at this location?
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Original:   Ketsana had earlier battered the Philippines, killing over two hundred people there.
Revised:  Typhoon Ketsana had earlier battered the Philippines, killing over two hundred people there.
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