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Original:  There have been well-documented instances where that policy was not followed, and service members have been held accountable for their actions in those cases." Bagram has come under fire before, because it is out of the jurisdiction of many laws banning torture and inhumane treatment and prisoners have no access to lawyers or to a justice system    
Revised:  There have been well-documented instances where that policy was not followed, and service members have been held accountable for their actions in those cases." Weve know each other for so long Your hearts been aching But youre too shy to say it Inside we both know whats been going on We know the game and were gonna play it 
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Original:  There have been well-documented instances where that policy was not followed, and service members have been held accountable for their actions in those cases." Bagram has come under fire before, because it is out of the jurisdiction of many laws banning torture and inhumane treatment and prisoners have no access to lawyers or to a justice system    
Revised:  There have been well-documented instances where that policy was not followed, and service members have been held accountable for their actions in those cases." Bagram has come under fire before, because it is out of the jurisdiction of many laws banning torture and inhumane treatment and prisoners have no access to lawyers or to a justice system (* repeat) 
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Original:  There have been well-documented instances where that policy was not followed, and service members have been held accountable for their actions in those cases." Bagram has come under fire before, because it is out of the jurisdiction of many laws banning torture and inhumane treatment and prisoners have no access to lawyers or to a justice system    
Revised:  There have been well-documented instances where that policy was not followed, and service members have been held accountable for their actions in those cases." Bagram has come under fire before, because it is out of the jurisdiction of many laws banning torture and inhumane treatment and prisoners have no access to lawyers or to a justice system Give you up. give you up Give you up, give you up Never gonna give Never gonna give, give you up Never gonna give Never gonna give, five you up 
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Original:  Spanish Prime Minister Jose Luis Rodriguez Zapatero  who had been campaigning for a global moratorium on the death penalty, witnessed the vote.
Revised:  Spanish Prime Minister Jose Luis Rodriguez Zapatero , who had been campaigning for a global moratorium on the death penalty, witnessed the vote.
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Original:  Zapatero commented on the vote  calling it a “giant step for Togo”.
Revised:  Zapatero commented on the vote , calling it a “giant step for Togo”.
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Original:  Those on death row will have the sentenced change to life imprisionment
Revised:  Those on death row will have the sentence changed to life imprisonment
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Original: McMahon also appeared in several films and was the host of the talent show Star Struck .
Revised: McMahon also appeared in several films and was the host of the talent show Star Search .
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Original: Threw out the past couple of years McMahon had battled several health issues.
Revised: Throughout the past couple of years McMahon had battled several health issues.
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Original:  In 2007 he fell and broke his neck threw which he suffered pain until his death.
Revised:  In 2007 he fell and broke his neck through which he suffered pain until his death.
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Original:  Made famous by his “Here’s Johnny” catchphrase  McMahon worked with Tonight Show host Johnny Carson for 30 years.
Revised:  Made famous by his “Here’s Johnny” catchphrase , McMahon worked with Tonight Show host Johnny Carson for 30 years.
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Original:  In 2007  he fell and broke his neck through which he suffered pain until his death.
Revised:  In 2007 , he fell and broke his neck through which he suffered pain until his death.
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Original:  McMahon who was a Marine Corps fighter pilot in World War Two returned to the United States after the war and graduated.
Revised:  McMahon who was a Marine Corps fighter pilot in World War II returned to the United States after the war and graduated.
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Original:  He annually co-hosted the Jerry Lewis Labor Day Telethon and conducted coverage of the Macy ’ s Thanksgiving Day Parade.
Revised:  He annually co-hosted the Jerry Lewis MDA Telethon and conducted coverage of the Macy ’ s Thanksgiving Day Parade.
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Original:  He annually co-hosted the Jerry Lewis Labor Day Telethon and conducted coverage of the Macy ’ s Thanksgiving Day Parade.
Revised:  He annually co-hosted the Jerry Lewis Labor Day Telethon and conducted coverage of the Macy ' s Thanksgiving Day Parade.
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Original: Ed McMahon in 2005 Ed McMahon, the long time announcer of The Tonight Show  has died age 86.
Revised: Ed McMahon in 2005 Ed McMahon, the long time announcer of The Tonight Show , has died age 86.
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Original:  McMahon  who joined The Tonight Show in 1962  died at the Ronald Regan UCLA Medical Centre shortly after midnight on June 23.
Revised:  McMahon , who joined The Tonight Show in 1962 died at the Ronald Regan UCLA Medical Centre shortly after midnight on June 23.
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Original:  McMahon  who joined The Tonight Show in 1962  died at the Ronald Regan UCLA Medical Centre shortly after midnight on June 23.
Revised:  McMahon who joined The Tonight Show in 1962 , died at the Ronald Regan UCLA Medical Centre shortly after midnight on June 23.
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Original:  McMahon  who joined The Tonight Show in 1962  died at the Ronald Regan UCLA Medical Centre shortly after midnight on June 23.
Revised:  McMahon who joined The Tonight Show in 1962 died at the Ronald Reagan UCLA Medical Center shortly after midnight on June 23.
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Original:  Made famous by his “Here’s Johnny  ” catchphrase, McMahon worked with Tonight Show host Johnny Carson for 30 years.
Revised:  Made famous by his “Here’s Johnny ! ” catchphrase, McMahon worked with Tonight Show host Johnny Carson for 30 years.
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Original:  Throughout the past couple of years McMahon had battled several health issues.
Revised:  In recent years, McMahon had battled several health issues.
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Original:  McMahon who was a Marine Corps fighter pilot in World War II  returned to the United States after the war and graduated.
Revised:  McMahon was a Marine Corps fighter pilot in World War II returned to the United States after the war and graduated.
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Original:  McMahon who was a Marine Corps fighter pilot in World War II  returned to the United States after the war and graduated.
Revised:  McMahon who was a Marine Corps fighter pilot in World War II and returned to the United States after the war and graduated.
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Original:  He was once again called up for service for the Korean War . After completing another tour of duty he returned and got his first major role.
Revised:  He later served in the Korean War . After completing another tour of duty he returned and got his first major role.
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Original:  He was once again called up for service for the Korean War . After completing another tour of duty he returned and got his first major role.
Revised:  He was once again called up for service for the Korean War , completing another tour of duty he returned and got his first major role.
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Original:  He was selected as the announcer for ABC daytime program Who Do You Trust? . This was the first time McMahon worked alongside Johnny Carson.
Revised:  He was selected as the announcer for ABC daytime program Who Do You Trust? This was the first time McMahon worked alongside Johnny Carson.
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Original:  McMahon made a reported $1 million a year working with Carson.
Revised:  McMahon earned a reported US $1 million a year working with Carson.
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Original:  No funeral arrangements have been made yet
Revised:  No funeral arrangements have been planned as of yet
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Original:  County Sherriff Jason Johnson said that “ Coach Thomas is the pillar of the community.
Revised:  County Sheriff Jason Johnson said that “ Coach Thomas is the pillar of the community.
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Original:  County Sherriff Jason Johnson said that “ Coach Thomas is the pillar of the community.
Revised:  County Sherriff Jason Johnson said that " Coach Thomas is the pillar of the community.
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Original:  Anything that affects him affects Parkersburg ”.
Revised:  Anything that affects him affects Parkersburg ."
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Original:  They had won their group games with ease and were expected to do so again with the United States, whom barely qualified for the semifinal rounds over Italy.
Revised:  They had won their group games with ease and were expected to do so again against the United States, whom barely qualified for the semifinal rounds over Italy.
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Original:  They had won their group games with ease and were expected to do so again with the United States, whom barely qualified for the semifinal rounds over Italy.
Revised:  They had won their group games with ease and were expected to do so again with the United States, who barely qualified for the semifinal rounds over Italy.
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Original:  The team attempted only four shots, both were on goal and scored while Spain attempted eleven shots with 6 on goal.
Revised:  The team attempted only four shots, both were on goal and both scored. Meanwhile, Spain attempted eleven shots with 6 on goal.
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Original:  The team attempted only four shots, both were on goal and scored while Spain attempted eleven shots with 6 on goal.
Revised:  The team attempted only four shots, both were on goal and scored while Spain attempted eleven shots with six on goal.
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Original: File:Clint Dempsey USA training.jpg|Clint Dempsey's goal (73') sealed the victory for the USA.
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Original:  The United States will play defending Confederations Cup champion Brazil or host team South Africa on Sunday in the tournament finals  
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Original:  The United States will play defending Confederations Cup champion Brazil or host team South Africa on Sunday in the tournament finals  
Revised:  The United States will play defending Confederations Cup champion Brazil or host team South Africa on Sunday in the tournament finals Give you up. give you up Give you up, give you up Never gonna give Never gonna give, give you up Never gonna give Never gonna give, five you up 
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Original:  He did not answer questions about if he would serve out the remainder of his last term in office, which nominally concludes in 2011.
Revised:  He did not answer questions about if he would serve out the remainder of his last term in office, which concludes in 2011.
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Original:   His wife, Jenny Sanford, was not aware of her husband's location during this time, as they have been undergoing a trial separation for the past two weeks following his private disclosure of the matter previously.
Revised:  Mark Sanford His wife, Jenny Sanford, was not aware of her husband's location during this time, as they have been undergoing a trial separation for the past two weeks following his private disclosure of the matter previously.
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Original:  Mark Sanford His wife, Jenny Sanford, was not aware of her husband's location during this time, as they have been undergoing a trial separation for the past two weeks following his private disclosure of the matter previously.
Revised:  His wife, Jenny Sanford, was not aware of her husband's location during this time, as they have been undergoing a trial separation for the past two weeks following his private disclosure of the matter previously.
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Original: Former champion Maria Sharapova of Russia saw her comeback attempt come to an early end, as Argentina's Gisela Dulko beat her, 6-2, 3-6, 6-4. Dulko faces 10th-seeded Nadia Petrova in the third round, after the Russian beat Shahar Peer of Israel, 6-3, 6-2. File:Gisela Dulko. jpg|Gisela Dulko.
Revised: Former champion of Russia saw her comeback attempt come to an early end, as Argentina's Gisela Dulko beat her, 6-2, 3-6, 6-4. Dulko faces 10th-seeded Nadia Petrova in the third round, after the Russian beat Shahar Peer of Israel, 6-3, 6-2. File:Gisela Dulko. jpg|Gisela Dulko.
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Original: Former champion Maria Sharapova of Russia saw her comeback attempt come to an early end, as Argentina's Gisela Dulko beat her, 6-2, 3-6, 6-4. Dulko faces 10th-seeded Nadia Petrova in the third round, after the Russian beat Shahar Peer of Israel, 6-3, 6-2. File:Gisela Dulko. jpg|Gisela Dulko.
Revised: Former champion Maria Sharapova of Russia saw her comeback attempt come to an early end, as Argentina's beat her, 6-2, 3-6, 6-4. Dulko faces 10th-seeded Nadia Petrova in the third round, after the Russian beat Shahar Peer of Israel, 6-3, 6-2. File:Gisela Dulko. jpg|Gisela Dulko.
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Original: Former champion Maria Sharapova of Russia saw her comeback attempt come to an early end, as Argentina's Gisela Dulko beat her, 6-2, 3-6, 6-4. Dulko faces 10th-seeded Nadia Petrova in the third round, after the Russian beat Shahar Peer of Israel, 6-3, 6-2. File:Gisela Dulko. jpg|Gisela Dulko.
Revised: Former champion Maria Sharapova of Russia saw her comeback attempt come to an early end, as Argentina's Gisela Dulko beat her, 6-2, 3-6, 6-4. Dulko faces 10th-seeded in the third round, after the Russian beat Shahar Peer of Israel, 6-3, 6-2. File:Gisela Dulko. jpg|Gisela Dulko.
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Original: Former champion Maria Sharapova of Russia saw her comeback attempt come to an early end, as Argentina's Gisela Dulko beat her, 6-2, 3-6, 6-4. Dulko faces 10th-seeded Nadia Petrova in the third round, after the Russian beat Shahar Peer of Israel, 6-3, 6-2. File:Gisela Dulko. jpg|Gisela Dulko.
Revised: Former champion Maria Sharapova of Russia saw her comeback attempt come to an early end, as Argentina's Gisela Dulko beat her, 6-2, 3-6, 6-4. Dulko faces 10th-seeded Nadia Petrova in the third round, after the Russian beat Shahar Peer of Israel, 6-3, 6-2. .
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Original:  Second-seeds Roger Federer of Switzerland and Serena Williams of the United States have advanced to the third round of the Wimbledon tennis championships in London.
Revised:  Second-seeds of Switzerland and Serena Williams of the United States have advanced to the third round of the Wimbledon tennis championships in London.
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Original:  Second-seeds Roger Federer of Switzerland and Serena Williams of the United States have advanced to the third round of the Wimbledon tennis championships in London.
Revised:  Second-seeds Roger Federer of Switzerland and of the United States have advanced to the third round of the Wimbledon tennis championships in London.
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Original:  Second-seeds Roger Federer of Switzerland and Serena Williams of the United States have advanced to the third round of the Wimbledon tennis championships in London.
Revised:  Second-seeds Roger Federer of Switzerland and Serena Williams of the United States have advanced to the third round of the in London.
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Original:  Williams took advantage of her big serve and powerful groundstrokes Wednesday as she dominated Australia's Jarmila Groth, 6-2, 6-1.
Revised:  Williams took advantage of her big serve and powerful ground strokes Wednesday as she dominated Australia's Jarmila Groth, 6-2, 6-1.
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Original:  Federer eliminated Spain's Guillermo García-Lopez , 6-2, 6-2, 6-4.
Revised:  Federer eliminated Spain's , 6-2, 6-2, 6-4.
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Original:  Federer is trying to pass American Pete Sampras as the sport's most successful major tournament winner by capturing his 15th Grand Slam title.
Revised:  Federer is trying to pass American as the sport's most successful major tournament winner by capturing his 15th Grand Slam title.
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Original:  In men's play, fourth-seeded Novak Djokovic of Serbia beat Germany's Simon Greul , 7-5, 6-1, 6-4.
Revised:  In men's play, fourth-seeded of Serbia beat Germany's Simon Greul , 7-5, 6-1, 6-4.
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Original:  In men's play, fourth-seeded Novak Djokovic of Serbia beat Germany's Simon Greul , 7-5, 6-1, 6-4.
Revised:  In men's play, fourth-seeded Novak Djokovic of Serbia beat Germany's , 7-5, 6-1, 6-4.
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Original:  His next opponent will be number-28 American Mardy Fish , a four-set winner over another Serb, Janko Tipsarevic (6-4, 3-6, 6-1 ,6-4)
Revised:  His next opponent will be number-28 American , a four-set winner over another Serb, Janko Tipsarevic (6-4, 3-6, 6-1 ,6-4)
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Original:  His next opponent will be number-28 American Mardy Fish , a four-set winner over another Serb, Janko Tipsarevic (6-4, 3-6, 6-1 ,6-4)
Revised:  His next opponent will be number-28 American Mardy Fish , a four-set winner over another Serb, (6-4, 3-6, 6-1 ,6-4)
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Original: File:1965 Peel P50, The World's Smallest Car (Lane Motor Museum).jpg|125px|Peel P50 ]] The Peel P50, a single door, three wheel microcar went on disply at New York's Ripley's Believe It or Not!
Revised: File:1965 Peel P50, The World's Smallest Car (Lane Motor Museum).jpg|125px|Peel P50 ]] The Peel P50, a single door, three wheel microcar went on display at New York's Ripley's Believe It or Not!
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Original:  The car is battery powered and can travel about before needing another battery charge .
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Original: The once theorised possibilty of discovering a global ocean have receded, to be replaced by one model of large subterranean caverns with large pools or lakes of water, created by tidal forces acting upon Enceladus, and it is from these mist filled caverns that the water evaporates into the atmosphere in a steady jet.
Revised: The once theorised possibility of discovering a global ocean have receded, to be replaced by one model of large subterranean caverns with large pools or lakes of water, created by tidal forces acting upon Enceladus, and it is from these mist filled caverns that the water evaporates into the atmosphere in a steady jet.
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Original: Enceladus from Voyager 2 A report published in the science journal Nature , of results from the Cassini probe , indicate the discovery of the existence of liquid water on Saturn's moon Enceladus, and with it the possibility of extraterrestrial life.
Revised: Enceladus from Voyager 2 A report published in the scientific journal Nature of results from the Cassini probe , indicate the discovery of the existence of liquid water on Saturn's moon Enceladus, and with it the possibility of extraterrestrial life.
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Original: Enceladus from Voyager 2 A report published in the science journal Nature , of results from the Cassini probe , indicate the discovery of the existence of liquid water on Saturn's moon Enceladus, and with it the possibility of extraterrestrial life.
Revised: Enceladus from Voyager 2 A report published in the science journal Nature , of results from the Cassini probe indicate the discovery of the existence of liquid water on Saturn's moon Enceladus, and with it the possibility of extraterrestrial life.
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Original:  Our present understanding of life requires the presence of three elements , the existence of complex organic molecules, liquid water and a source of energy.
Revised:  The currently understood scientific model of how life occurs requires the presence of three elements , the existence of complex organic molecules, liquid water and a source of energy.
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Original:  Our present understanding of life requires the presence of three elements , the existence of complex organic molecules, liquid water and a source of energy.
Revised:  Our present understanding of life requires the presence of three elements : the existence of complex organic molecules, liquid water and a source of energy.
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Original:  The once theorised possibility of discovering a global ocean have receded, to be replaced by one model of large subterranean caverns with large pools or lakes of water, created by tidal forces acting upon Enceladus, and it is from these mist filled caverns that the water evaporates into the atmosphere in a steady jet.
Revised:  The possibility of discovering a global ocean have receded, to be replaced by one model of large subterranean caverns with large pools or lakes of water, created by tidal forces acting upon Enceladus, and it is from these mist filled caverns that the water evaporates into the atmosphere in a steady jet.
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Original:  The once theorised possibility of discovering a global ocean have receded, to be replaced by one model of large subterranean caverns with large pools or lakes of water, created by tidal forces acting upon Enceladus, and it is from these mist filled caverns that the water evaporates into the atmosphere in a steady jet.
Revised:  The once theorised possibility of discovering a global ocean on the moon has receded, and has been replaced by the idea of large subterranean caverns with large pools or lakes of water, created by tidal forces acting upon Enceladus, and it is from these mist filled caverns that the water evaporates into the atmosphere in a steady jet.
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Original:  However  until further flybys and missions can be carried out other mechanisms for the presence of salt water ice cannot yet be ruled out
Revised:  However , until further flybys and missions can be carried out other mechanisms for the presence of salt water ice cannot yet be ruled out
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Original:  However  until further flybys and missions can be carried out other mechanisms for the presence of salt water ice cannot yet be ruled out
Revised:  However until further flybys and missions can be carried out other mechanisms for the presence of salt water ice cannot yet be dismissed
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Original: The currently understood theoretic model of how life occurs requires the presence of three elements: the existence of complex organic molecules, liquid water and a source of energy.
Revised: The currently accepted scientific theory for how life occurs requires the presence of three elements: the existence of complex organic molecules, liquid water and a source of energy.
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Original: At a press conference held Wednesday in Paris, France, Iranian-American journalist Roxana Saberi called on Iran to release Silva Harotonian, an Iranian citizen working for a U.S. aid agency.
Revised: At a press conference held Wednesday in Paris, France, Iranian-American journalist Roxana Saberi called on Iran to release Silva Harotonian, an Iranian citizen working for a United States aid agency.
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Original:  On January 31, four members of the Ministry of Intelligence and National Security of Iran took her from her home her to face charges of spying for the United States.
Revised:  On January 31, four members of the Ministry of Intelligence and National Security of Iran took her from her home to face charges of spying for the United States.
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Original: The search engine giant Google is reportedly not accessible in some parts of China and that Google.com services such as mail was down from Wednesday night to Thursday morning Beijing time.
Revised: The search engine giant Google is reportedly not accessible in some parts of China and Google.com services such as mail was down from Wednesday night to Thursday morning Beijing time.
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