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Original:  I would institute complete tax reform and remove crony capitalism by instituting the Flat Tax (simple and fair and no national sales tax and a supermajority to change the rate).
Revised:  I would institute complete tax reform and remove crony capitalism by instituting the (simple and fair and no national sales tax and a supermajority to change the rate).
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Original: The study found greater ad-spending in a market were related to both higher levels of youth drinking and steeper increases in drinking over time, continuing till the late 20s .
Revised: The study found greater ad-spending in a market was related to both higher levels of youth drinking and steeper increases in drinking over time, continuing till the late 20s .
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Original: The study found greater ad-spending in a market were related to both higher levels of youth drinking and steeper increases in drinking over time, continuing till the late 20s .
Revised: The study found greater ad-spending in a market were related to both higher levels of youth drinking and steeper increases in drinking over time, which continued until respondents were in their mid-twenties .
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Original:  The link also held the other way , with less alcohol advertising associated with less drinking, more modest increases over time until the early 20s, after which it started to decline .
Revised:  The link also held the other way : less alcohol advertising associated with less drinking, more modest increases over time until the early 20s, after which it started to decline .
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Original:  The link also held the other way , with less alcohol advertising associated with less drinking, more modest increases over time until the early 20s, after which it started to decline .
Revised:  The link also held the other way , with less alcohol advertising associated with less drinking, more modest increases in consumption over time during the respondents' early twenties and a steady decline in consumption after this period .
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Original:  The present survey uses market-level measures of advertising to address critisism of previous studies that relying on self-reported exposure to advertisements might be biased as those who drink may be more likely to pay attention to, and remember the ads.
Revised:  The present survey uses market-level measures of advertising to address criticism of previous studies that relying on self-reported exposure to advertisements might be biased as those who drink may be more likely to pay attention to, and remember the ads.
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Original:  The U.S. Drug Enforcement Administration has supsected Toussaint of drug trafficking in the past.
Revised:  The U.S. Drug Enforcement Administration has suspected Toussaint of drug trafficking in the past.
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Original:  Russia took the chair from Great-Britain .
Revised:  Russia took the chair from Great Britain .
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Original:  Before, the "Great 8" had been the "Great 7", the members being the U.S.A., Canada, Japan, Germany, France, Great Britain and Italy . Russland ist dem Klub der höchstentwickelten Länder der Welt in 1997 beigetreten .
Revised:  Before, the "Great 8" had been the "Great 7", the members being the U.S.A., Canada, Japan, Germany, France, Great Britain and Italy .
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Original:  Russia became chair of the " Great 8" (G8) on 1 January.
Revised:  Russia became chair of the " Group of 8" (G8) on 1 January.
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Original:  Before, the " Great 8" had been the " Great 7", the members being the U.S.A., Canada, Japan, Germany, France, Great Britain and Italy.
Revised:  Before, the " Group of 8" had been the " Great 7", the members being the U.S.A., Canada, Japan, Germany, France, Great Britain and Italy.
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Original:  Before, the " Great 8" had been the " Great 7", the members being the U.S.A., Canada, Japan, Germany, France, Great Britain and Italy.
Revised:  Before, the " Great 8" had been the " Group of 7", the members being the U.S.A., Canada, Japan, Germany, France, Great Britain and Italy.
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Original:  In 2007, the chair of the " Great 8" will be passed to Germany.
Revised:  In 2007, the chair of the " Group of 8" will be passed to Germany.
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Original:  According to the , more than 3,000 people have been killed since protests began in March .
Revised:  According to the , more than 3,000 people have been killed since protests began in March 
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Original:  Protests calling for a to be imposed over Syrian skies took place across Syria on Friday are thought to have resulted in at least 37 deaths.
Revised:  Protests calling for a to be imposed over Syrian skies took place across Syria on Friday are thought to have resulted in around 37 deaths.
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Original:  According to the , more than 3,000 people have been killed since protests began in March   
Revised:  According to the , more than 3,000 people have been killed since protests began in March . 
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Original:  Protests calling for a to be imposed over Syrian skies took place across Syria on Friday are thought to have resulted in around 37 deaths.
Revised:  Friday saw protests accross Syria calling for a to be imposed over Syrian skies took place across Syria on Friday are thought to have resulted in around 37 deaths.
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Original:  Protests calling for a to be imposed over Syrian skies took place across Syria on Friday are thought to have resulted in around 37 deaths.
Revised:  Protests calling for a to be imposed over the nation and are thought to have resulted in around 37 deaths.
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Original:  Friday saw protests accross Syria calling for a to be imposed over the nation and are thought to have resulted in around 37 deaths.
Revised:  Friday saw protests accross Syria calling for a to be imposed over the nation . The protests are thought to have resulted in around 37 deaths.
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Original:  Friday saw protests accross Syria calling for a to be imposed over the nation.
Revised:  Friday saw protests across Syria calling for a to be imposed over the nation.
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Original: This wave of protests comes after the deposition of in nearby Libya,  which warplanes played a major part in ;
Revised: This wave of protests comes after the deposition of in nearby Libya, in which warplanes played a major part in ;
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Original: This wave of protests comes after the deposition of in nearby Libya,  which warplanes played a major part in ;
Revised: This wave of protests comes after the deposition of in nearby Libya, which warplanes played a major part ;
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Original: This wave of protests comes after the deposition of in nearby Libya, in which warplanes played a major part  ;
Revised: This wave of protests comes after the deposition of in nearby Libya, which warplanes played a major part ;
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Original: This wave of protests comes after the deposition of in nearby Libya, in which warplanes played a major part  ;
Revised: This wave of protests comes after the deposition of in nearby Libya, in which warplanes played a major part in ;
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Original: On the morning of Monday, January 2, 2005, the 117th Tournament of Roses Rose Parade marched through Pasadena, California in the only the tenth occurance of rain on the morning of the parade.
Revised: On the morning of Monday, January 2, 2005, the 117th Tournament of Roses Rose Parade marched through Pasadena, California in only the tenth occurance of rain on the morning of the parade.
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Original:  Crowds were smaller than normal and
Revised:  Crowds were smaller than normal .
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Original:  Many street vendors left once sales or inventory dried up (figuritively speaking 
Revised:  Many street vendors left once sales or inventory dried up (figuritively speaking )
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Original: The Cardinals won the last game 6–2, ensuring  Texas' second successive World Series loss ;
Revised: The Cardinals won the last game 6–2, ensuring The defeat was Texas' second successive World Series loss ;
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Original:  The defeat    was Texas' second successive World Series loss, coming after a defeat to last year 
Revised:  The defeat The defeat was Texas' second successive World Series loss, coming after a defeat to last year 
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Original:  Carpenter struck out five Rangers batsmen throughout the game.
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Original:  Playing in place of injured left fielder , Craig's homer in the third put the hosts into the lead for the first time    .
Revised:  Playing in place of injured left fielder , Craig's homer in the third put the hosts into the lead for the first time . .
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Original:  Greg Heakes of  called him the "hero" of an "epic" game.
Revised:  Greg Heakes of the called him the "hero" of an "epic" game.
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Original: Johnson and Johnson released that two patients have died after taking the  heart drug Natrecor.
Revised: Johnson and Johnson has released information that two patients have died after taking the heart drug Natrecor.
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Original:  These deaths were not included in a report of a study the company released in October .
Revised:  The deaths were not included in a report of a study the company released in October .
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Original:  They intend to reanalyze the data to see if these two deaths are of statistical significance to the drug's risk.
Revised:  The company intends to reanalyze the data to see if these two deaths are of statistical significance to the drug's risk.
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Original:  Natrecor is  used to treat acute heart failure and has been approved by the FDA since 2001.
Revised:  Natrecor is a drug used to treat acute heart failure and has been approved by the FDA since 2001.
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Original:  Johnson and Johnson said that the new report will be available in march
Revised:  A new report is said to be available in march
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Original: 200px The Australia First Party is writing to it's supporters requesting that they become members in order to re-register as a political party in Australia.
Revised: 200px The Australia First Party is writing to its supporters requesting that they become members in order to re-register as a political party in Australia.
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Original: Recently it has been alleged that the Australia First Party and it's offspring the Patriotic Youth League had been involved in organising the racial violence in Sydney in December last year.
Revised: Recently it has been alleged that the Australia First Party and its offspring the Patriotic Youth League had been involved in organising the racial violence in Sydney in December last year.
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Original:  Limits are getting tighter in the EU and Japan as well  
Revised:  Limits are getting tighter in the EU and Japan as well . 
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Original:  According to the Bureau of Meteorology, (BOM) 2005 was the hottest year since since reliable, widespread temperature observations became available in 1910.
Revised:  According to the Bureau of Meteorology, (BOM) 2005 was the hottest year since reliable, widespread temperature observations became available in 1910.
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Original:  According to a preliminary estimate released by the World Meteorological Organization (WMO), the global mean temperature for 2005 was about 0.48°C above normal, putting 2005 amongst the four warmest years globally since records commenced in 1861 
Revised:  According to a preliminary estimate released by the World Meteorological Organization (WMO), the global mean temperature for 2005 was about 0.48°C above normal, putting 2005 amongst the four warmest years globally since records commenced in 1861. 
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Original:  The 2005 record is yet another sign that our climate is changing.
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Original:  Australia ’ s previous warmest years on record were influenced by significant El Niño events, say the Bureau.
Revised:  Australia ' s previous warmest years on record were influenced by significant El Niño events, say the Bureau.
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Original:  Australia ’ s area-averaged rainfall is calculated from a network of around 5000 rainfall stations.
Revised:  Australia ' s area-averaged rainfall is calculated from a network of around 5000 rainfall stations.
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Original:  The surviving miner, Randal McCloy, is currently in critical condition at Ruby Memorial Hospital   .
Revised:  The surviving miner, Randal McCloy, is currently in critical condition at Ruby Memorial Hospital . .
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Original: According to many news outlets including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only 1 has survived, reversing earlier reports  that 12 had been found alive and 1 dead that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends 3 hours earlier in the day .
Revised: According to many news sources including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only 1 has survived, reversing earlier reports that 12 had been found alive and 1 dead that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends 3 hours earlier in the day .
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Original: According to many news outlets including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only 1 has survived, reversing earlier reports  that 12 had been found alive and 1 dead that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends 3 hours earlier in the day .
Revised: According to many news outlets including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only one has survived, reversing earlier reports that 12 had been found alive and 1 dead that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends 3 hours earlier in the day .
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Original: According to many news outlets including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only 1 has survived, reversing earlier reports  that 12 had been found alive and 1 dead that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends 3 hours earlier in the day .
Revised: According to many news outlets including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only 1 has survived, reversing earlier reports three hours earlier that 12 had been found alive and 1 dead that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends 3 hours earlier in the day .
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Original: According to many news outlets including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only 1 has survived, reversing earlier reports  that 12 had been found alive and 1 dead that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends 3 hours earlier in the day .
Revised: According to many news outlets including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only 1 has survived, reversing earlier reports that 12 had been found alive -- a report that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends 3 hours earlier in the day .
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Original: According to many news outlets including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only 1 has survived, reversing earlier reports  that 12 had been found alive and 1 dead that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends 3 hours earlier in the day .
Revised: According to many news outlets including CNN and USA Today, reports indicate that 12 coal miners have been found dead in the mine in Sago, West Virginia and only 1 has survived, reversing earlier reports that 12 had been found alive and 1 dead that had caused celebration amongst family members and friends .
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Original:  The surviving family members of the miners that died were notified of the deaths by Ben Hatfield, the President of the International Coal Company , at the Sago Baptist Church.
Revised:  The family members of the miners that died were notified of the deaths by Ben Hatfield, the President of the International Coal Company , at the Sago Baptist Church.
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Original:  The surviving family members of the miners that died were notified of the deaths by Ben Hatfield, the President of the International Coal Company , at the Sago Baptist Church.
Revised:  The surviving family members of the dead miners were notified of the deaths by Ben Hatfield, the President of the International Coal Company , at the Sago Baptist Church.
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Original:  The surviving family members of the miners that died were notified of the deaths by Ben Hatfield, the President of the International Coal Company , at the Sago Baptist Church.
Revised:  The surviving family members of the miners that died were notified of the deaths by Ben Hatfield, the President of the International Coal Groi , at the Sago Baptist Church.
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Original:  The president blamed the reversal on " lack of communication " . "What happened is that through stray cell phone conversations it appears that this miscommunication from the rescue team underground to the command center was picked up by various people that simply overheard the conversation that was relayed over cell phone communications without our ever having made a [public news] release," explained Mr. Hatfield.
Revised:  Hatfield blamed the reversal on " lack of communication " . "What happened is that through stray cell phone conversations it appears that this miscommunication from the rescue team underground to the command center was picked up by various people that simply overheard the conversation that was relayed over cell phone communications without our ever having made a [public news] release," explained Mr. Hatfield.
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Original:  The president blamed the reversal on " lack of communication " . "What happened is that through stray cell phone conversations it appears that this miscommunication from the rescue team underground to the command center was picked up by various people that simply overheard the conversation that was relayed over cell phone communications without our ever having made a [public news] release," explained Mr. Hatfield.
Revised:  The president blamed the reversal on " bad information " . "What happened is that through stray cell phone conversations it appears that this miscommunication from the rescue team underground to the command center was picked up by various people that simply overheard the conversation that was relayed over cell phone communications without our ever having made a [public news] release," explained Mr. Hatfield.
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Original:  The president blamed the reversal on " lack of communication " . "What happened is that through stray cell phone conversations it appears that this miscommunication from the rescue team underground to the command center was picked up by various people that simply overheard the conversation that was relayed over cell phone communications without our ever having made a [public news] release," explained Mr. Hatfield.
Revised:  The president blamed the reversal on " lack of communication " and "miscommunication." "What happened is that through stray cell phone conversations it appears that this miscommunication from the rescue team underground to the command center was picked up by various people that simply overheard the conversation that was relayed over cell phone communications without our ever having made a [public news] release," explained Mr. Hatfield.
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Original:  The president blamed the reversal on " lack of communication " . "What happened is that through stray cell phone conversations it appears that this miscommunication from the rescue team underground to the command center was picked up by various people that simply overheard the conversation that was relayed over cell phone communications without our ever having made a [public news] release," explained Mr. Hatfield.
Revised:  The president blamed the reversal on " lack of communication " . "What happened is that through stray cell phone conversations it appears that this miscommunication from the rescue team underground to the command center was picked up by various people that simply overheard the conversation that was relayed over cell phone communications without our ever having made a [public news] release," explained Hatfield.
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Original:  The United States Mine Safety and Health Administration issued the mine 208 citations last year, up from 68 reported in 2004.
Revised:  The United States Mine Safety and Health Administration issued the mine 208 citations last year, an increase from 68 reported in 2004.
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Original:  Federal regulations cover concerns over accumulations of combustible materials, such as methane gas and coal dust from loose coal, in addition to other safety issues.
Revised:  Federal regulations cover concerns over accumulations of combustible materials, including methane gas and coal dust from loose coal, in addition to other safety issues.
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Original:  It now plans on launching a in-depth investigation into the incident  .
Revised:  The agency has announced that it plans launch a in-depth investigation into the incident .
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Original: 250px|New Zealand hoilday road toll over 5 years The New Zealand Christmas – New Year road toll has climbed to 9 more ;
Revised: 250px|New Zealand hoilday road toll over 5 years The New Zealand Christmas – New Year road toll has climbed to 9 more 
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Original:  than the 11 deaths in the entire period last year . After a Korean man became ;
Revised:  than the 11 deaths in the entire period last year , after a Korean man became ;
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Original:  than the 11 deaths in the entire period last year . After a Korean man became ;
Revised:  than the 11 deaths in the entire period last year . After a Korean man became 
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Original:  The final tally ;
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Original:  Police National Road Safety Manager, Inspector John Kelly  says “the final toll may fluctuate, depending on the outcome of investigations into the crashes that took place."
Revised:  Police National Road Safety Manager, Inspector John Kelly , says “the final toll may fluctuate, depending on the outcome of investigations into the crashes that took place."
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Original:  In 2005  for the full year ;
Revised:  In 2005 , for the full year ;
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Original:  In 2005  for the full year ;
Revised:  In 2005 for the full year ,
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Original:  404 people died on New Zealand roads,  31 less than the previous year (2004) .
Revised:  404 people died on New Zealand roads, which is 31 less than the previous year (2004) .
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Original:  404 people died on New Zealand roads,  31 less than the previous year (2004) .
Revised:  404 people died on New Zealand roads, 31 less than the previous year .
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Original: Image:Deerfire.jpg|A wildfire in Bitterroot National Forest in Montana, United States.
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Original:  Three other BIA aircraft aided crews fighting fires near Wewoka, in central Oklahoma, and additional fires were reported near Knowles, Oklahoma City, Ponca City and Tishmingo ,
Revised:  Three other BIA aircraft aided crews fighting fires near Wewoka, in central Oklahoma, and additional fires were reported near Knowles, Oklahoma City, Ponca City and Tishmingo .
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