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Original:  Major mining companies  BHP Billiton and Rio Tinto are already suffering with the loss of their gas supply, the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they dont expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry.
Revised:  Major mining companies BHP Billiton and Rio Tinto have already reported they are suffering with the loss of their gas supply, the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they dont expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry.
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Original:  Major mining companies  BHP Billiton and Rio Tinto are already suffering with the loss of their gas supply, the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they dont expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry.
Revised:  Major mining companies BHP Billiton and Rio Tinto are already suffering with the loss of gas supply, the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they dont expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry.
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Original:  Minister for Energy  Fran Logan has admitted that the gas shortage caused by tuesdays fire is damaging the economy as mining, manufacturing and construction industries wind back operations.
Revised: The Minister for Energy Fran Logan has admitted that the gas shortage caused by tuesdays fire is damaging the economy as mining, manufacturing and construction industries wind back operations.
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Original:  Minister for Energy  Fran Logan has admitted that the gas shortage caused by tuesdays fire is damaging the economy as mining, manufacturing and construction industries wind back operations.
Revised:  Minister for Energy , Fran Logan has admitted that the gas shortage caused by tuesdays fire is damaging the economy as mining, manufacturing and construction industries wind back operations.
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Original:  Minister for Energy  Fran Logan has admitted that the gas shortage caused by tuesdays fire is damaging the economy as mining, manufacturing and construction industries wind back operations.
Revised:  Minister for Energy Fran Logan has admitted that the gas shortage caused by Tuesday's fire is damaging the economy as mining, manufacturing and construction industries wind back operations.
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Original:  Western Australias two major brick producing companies have shut operations and Wesbeam  $A100 million Neerabup pine production facility has been closed its 130 employees have been stood down.
Revised:  Western Australia's two major brick producing companies have shut operations and Wesbeam $A100 million Neerabup pine production facility has been closed its 130 employees have been stood down.
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Original:  Western Australias two major brick producing companies have shut operations and Wesbeam  $A100 million Neerabup pine production facility has been closed its 130 employees have been stood down.
Revised:  Western Australias two major brick producing companies have shut operations and Wesbeam 's $A100 million Neerabup pine production facility has been closed its 130 employees have been stood down.
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Original:  Western Australias two major brick producing companies have shut operations and Wesbeam  $A100 million Neerabup pine production facility has been closed its 130 employees have been stood down.
Revised:  Western Australias two major brick producing companies have shut operations and Wesbeam $A100 million Neerabup pine production facility has been closed , their 130 employees have been stood down.
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Original:  Wesbeam cheif executive James Malone said  "It ’ s an industrial tsunami in my view.
Revised:  Wesbeam chief executive James Malone said "It ’ s an industrial tsunami in my view.
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Original:  Wesbeam cheif executive James Malone said  "It ’ s an industrial tsunami in my view.
Revised:  Wesbeam cheif executive James Malone said , "It ’ s an industrial tsunami in my view.
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Original:  Wesbeam cheif executive James Malone said  "It ’ s an industrial tsunami in my view.
Revised:  Wesbeam cheif executive James Malone said "It ' s an industrial tsunami in my view.
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Original:  It ’ s a little ripple that has very quickly had a huge multiplying effect on the whole community , "  Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It ’ s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
Revised:  It ' s a little ripple that has very quickly had a huge multiplying effect on the whole community , " Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It ’ s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
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Original:  It ’ s a little ripple that has very quickly had a huge multiplying effect on the whole community , "  Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It ’ s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
Revised:  It ’ s a little ripple that has very quickly had a huge multiplying effect on the whole community " Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It ’ s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
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Original:  It ’ s a little ripple that has very quickly had a huge multiplying effect on the whole community , "  Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It ’ s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
Revised:  It ’ s a little ripple that has very quickly had a huge multiplying effect on the whole community , " . Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It ’ s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
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Original:  It ’ s a little ripple that has very quickly had a huge multiplying effect on the whole community , "  Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It ’ s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
Revised:  It ’ s a little ripple that has very quickly had a huge multiplying effect on the whole community , " Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It ' s a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
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Original: Michael McLean, Master Building Association direct said "It's a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
Revised: Michael McLean, Master Building Association director said "It's a worst-nightmare scenario, and not one we could have imagined in our wildest dreams," building supplies are expected to start running out by the middle of next week.
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Original:  Premier Carpenter has announced a meeting of ministers and industry representatives to take place on sunday to discuss solutions to the growing crisis.
Revised:  Premier Carpenter has announced a meeting of ministers and industry representatives to take place on Sunday to discuss solutions to the growing crisis.
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Original:  Tim Wall  managing director of Apache has said Apache is conducting a worldwide search for the parts need to repair the pipeline.
Revised:  Tim Wall , managing director of Apache has said Apache is conducting a worldwide search for the parts need to repair the pipeline.
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Original:  Major mining companies and Apache partners BHP Billiton and Rio Tinto have already reported they are suffering with the loss of gas supply , the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they dont expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry.
Revised:  Major mining companies and Apache partners BHP Billiton and Rio Tinto have already reported they are suffering with the loss of gas supply ; the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they dont expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry.
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Original:  Major mining companies and Apache partners BHP Billiton and Rio Tinto have already reported they are suffering with the loss of gas supply , the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they dont expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry.
Revised:  Major mining companies and Apache partners BHP Billiton and Rio Tinto have already reported they are suffering with the loss of gas supply , the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they don't expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry.
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Original: Western Australian Master Builders Association (MBA) yesterday demanded the  Carpenter Government call an emergency cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis gripping WA.
Revised: Western Australian Master Builders Association (MBA) yesterday demanded the | Carpenter Government call an emergency cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis gripping WA.
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Original:  the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they don't expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry   .
Revised:  the Chamber of Minerals and Energy has talked down the effect saying that they don't expect the crisis to take the heat off the booming mining industry . .
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Original: Western Australian Master Builders Association (MBA) yesterday demanded the | Carpenter Government call an emergency cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis gripping WA.
Revised: Western Australian Master Builders Association (MBA) yesterday demanded the Carpenter Government call an emergency cabinet meeting to avoid a "state of emergency" over the energy crisis gripping WA.
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Original:  “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election,” he said  
Revised:  “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election,” he said . 
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Original: He continued his speech to the World Economic Forum . "The regime is increasing the decibels of insanity.
Revised: He continued his speech to the forum . "The regime is increasing the decibels of insanity.
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Original: Political figures from various African countries meeting as part of the 2008 World Economic Forum on Africa African politicians have recently met at the 2008 World Economic Forum on Africa, where they discussed a variety of different issues, including the current situation in Zimbabwe.
Revised: Political figures from various African countries meeting as part of the 2008 World Economic Forum on Africa African politicians met at the 2008 World Economic Forum on Africa, where they discussed a variety of different issues, including the current situation in Zimbabwe.
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Original: Political figures from various African countries meeting as part of the 2008 World Economic Forum on Africa African politicians have recently met at the 2008 World Economic Forum on Africa, where they discussed a variety of different issues, including the current situation in Zimbabwe.
Revised: Political figures from various African countries meeting as part of the 2008 World Economic Forum on Africa African politicians have recently met at the 2008 World Economic Forum on Africa, where they discussed a variety of issues, including the current situation in Zimbabwe.
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Original:  Simba Makoni, a former finance minister in Zimabawe , said the chance of a free election in Zimbabwe was low . “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election , ” he said.
Revised:  Simba Makoni, a former finance minister in Zimbabwe , said the chance of a free election in Zimbabwe was low . “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election , ” he said.
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Original:  Simba Makoni, a former finance minister in Zimabawe , said the chance of a free election in Zimbabwe was low . “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election , ” he said.
Revised:  Simba Makoni, a former finance minister in Zimabawe , said the chance of a free election in Zimbabwe was low : “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election , ” he said.
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Original:  Simba Makoni, a former finance minister in Zimabawe , said the chance of a free election in Zimbabwe was low . “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election , ” he said.
Revised:  Simba Makoni, a former finance minister in Zimabawe , said the chance of a free election in Zimbabwe was low . “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election . ” he said.
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Original:  Simba Makoni, a former finance minister in Zimabawe , said the chance of a free election in Zimbabwe was low . “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election , ” he said.
Revised:  Simba Makoni, a former finance minister in Zimabawe , said the chance of a free election in Zimbabwe was low . “Conditions have been created in the country as a whole, but particularly in the rural areas, where there is no prospect of any semblance of a free and fair election , ” 
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Original: In Jakarta, Indonesia today the 5 missing European divers have been found to be alive .
Revised: Five European divers who recently went missing in Indonesia have been found to be alive .
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Original:  The three were from UK, two others from France and Sweden were found and rescued after a large search in that area when they were last seen on Thursday when they went into the water from a wooden boat said a local police chief .
Revised:  The three were from UK, two others from France and Sweden were found and rescued after a large search of the area .
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Original: Three of the divers were from the UK, and one was from each of France and Sweeden .
Revised: Three of the divers were from the UK, and one was from each of France and Sweden .
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Original: The police cheif said the 5 divers had drifted for more than 12 hours when they landed on Rinca Island which is about 20 miles from where they first dived.
Revised: The local chief of police reported that the group were found on an island that was 20 miles from where they first dived.
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Original: "They were found alive and are seeking medical assistence" said Ernest Leandowski  husband of one of the UK divers.
Revised: "They were found alive and are seeking medical assistence" said Ernest Leandowski , husband of one of the UK divers.
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Original:  The national park is very popular within the diving community . Category:Indonesi
Revised:  The national park is very popular within the diving community Category:Indonesi
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Original:  The national park is very popular within the diving community . Category:Indonesi
Revised:  The national park is very popular within the diving community . 
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Original:  She also claimed the new fee had been implemented "a couple [of] months ago",  reported.
Revised:  She also claimed the new fee had been implemented "a couple [of] months ago", The reported.
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Original:  The rise followed a scandal last weekend involving   60 Lebanese asylum seekers voluntarily deciding to return home from the , an Australian , and neighbouring after facing harsh physical conditions and disorientation.
Revised:  The rise followed a scandal last weekend involving Lebanese asylum seekers voluntarily deciding to return home from the , an Australian , after facing harsh conditions. 60 Lebanese asylum seekers voluntarily deciding to return home from the , an Australian , and neighbouring after facing harsh physical conditions and disorientation.
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Original:  The rise followed a scandal last weekend involving   60 Lebanese asylum seekers voluntarily deciding to return home from the , an Australian , and neighbouring after facing harsh physical conditions and disorientation.
Revised:  The rise followed a scandal last weekend involving The rise followed a scandal last weekend involving 60 Lebanese asylum seekers voluntarily deciding to return home from the , an Australian , and neighbouring after facing harsh physical conditions and disorientation.
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Original:  The rise followed a scandal last weekend involving   60 Lebanese asylum seekers voluntarily deciding to return home from the , an Australian , and neighbouring after facing harsh physical conditions and disorientation.
Revised:  The rise followed a scandal last weekend involving 60 Lebanese asylum seekers voluntarily deciding to return home from the , an Australian , after facing harsh physical conditions and disorientation.
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Original:  The rise of the visa fee followed a recent scandal involving  60 Lebanese asylum seekers, targeted by people smugglers, deciding to return home from the Nauru detention centre after a discussion with Lebanese local community leader, Jamal Rifi , on the weekend of January 4, 5. He appeared to be concerned of the local community being targeted by the people smugglers and a need in community education.
Revised:  The rise of the visa fee followed a recent scandal involving 60 Lebanese asylum seekers, targeted by people smugglers, deciding to return home from the Nauru detention centre after a discussion with Lebanese local community leader, Jamal Rifi , on the weekend of January 4.
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Original:  The rise followed a scandal last weekend involving Lebanese asylum seekers voluntarily deciding to return home from the , an Australian , after facing harsh conditions.
Revised:  The rise followed a scandal last weekend involving Lebanese asylum seekers voluntarily deciding to return home from the , an Australian , after facing controversial conditions.
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Original:  The rise of the visa fee followed a recent scandal involving the majority of 60 Lebanese asylum seekers, targeted by people smugglers, deciding to return home from the Nauru and neighbouring detention centres after a discussion with Australian government advisor Jamal Rifi on the weekend of January 4.
Revised:  The rise of the visa fee followed a recent scandal involving the majority of 60 Lebanese asylum seekers, targeted by people smugglers, deciding to return home from the Nauru and neighbouring detention centres after a discussion with Australian government adviser Jamal Rifi on the weekend of January 4.
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Original:  The (UNHCR) had reviewed the detention centre in December , 2012, reporting harsh physical conditions:  UNHCR also cited delays processing the refugee applications, lack of legal counseling, health issues including trauma and mental health cases, and responsibility of both Australia and Nauru for the treatment.
Revised:  The (UNHCR) reviewed the detention centre in December , 2012, reporting harsh physical conditions: UNHCR also cited delays processing the refugee applications, lack of legal counseling, health issues including trauma and mental health cases, and responsibility of both Australia and Nauru for the treatment.
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Original:  The (UNHCR) had reviewed the detention centre in December , 2012, reporting harsh physical conditions:  UNHCR also cited delays processing the refugee applications, lack of legal counseling, health issues including trauma and mental health cases, and responsibility of both Australia and Nauru for the treatment.
Revised:  The (UNHCR) had reviewed the detention centre in December 2012, reporting harsh physical conditions: UNHCR also cited delays processing the refugee applications, lack of legal counseling, health issues including trauma and mental health cases, and responsibility of both Australia and Nauru for the treatment.
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Original:  The (UNHCR) had reviewed the detention centre in December , 2012, reporting harsh physical conditions:  UNHCR also cited delays processing the refugee applications, lack of legal counseling, health issues including trauma and mental health cases, and responsibility of both Australia and Nauru for the treatment.
Revised:  The (UNHCR) had reviewed the detention centre in December , 2012, reporting harsh physical conditions: The UNHCR also cited delays processing the refugee applications, lack of legal counseling, health issues including trauma and mental health cases, and responsibility of both Australia and Nauru for the treatment.
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Original:  Last Friday, Australian officials told a Pakistani refugee living in Australia that a refugee application could take up to 10 years to process, while he was applying for refuge for his brothers following death of his parents and wife in Pakistan . Ernest Stephen said only three or four Nauru media visas were granted last year
Revised:  Last Friday, Australian officials told a Pakistani refugee living in Australia that a refugee application could take up to ten years to process, while he was applying for refuge for his brothers following death of his parents and wife in Pakistan . Ernest Stephen said only three or four Nauru media visas were granted last year
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Original:  Last Friday, Australian officials told a Pakistani refugee living in Australia that a refugee application could take up to 10 years to process, while he was applying for refuge for his brothers following death of his parents and wife in Pakistan . Ernest Stephen said only three or four Nauru media visas were granted last year
Revised:  Last Friday, Australian officials told a Pakistani refugee living in Australia that a refugee application could take up to 10 years to process, while he was applying for refuge for his brothers following death of his parents and wife in Pakistan Ernest Stephen said only three or four Nauru media visas were granted last year
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