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Original:  they said at the time that they held themselves to higher standards than the Democrats  
Revised:  they said at the time that they held themselves to higher standards than the Democrats . 
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Original:  they said at the time that they held themselves to higher standards than the Democrats . Bunch of butt monkeys
Revised:  they said at the time that they held themselves to higher standards than the Democrats Bunch of butt monkeys
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Original:  they said at the time that they held themselves to higher standards than the Democrats . Bunch of butt monkeys
Revised:  they said at the time that they held themselves to higher standards than the Democrats . 
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Original: January 1, 2005 Category:January 1, 2005 Republican members of the House of Representatives are proposing a bill that would reduce the standard of ethical conduct required of representatives.
Revised:  Republican members of the House of Representatives are proposing a bill that would reduce the standard of ethical conduct required of representatives.
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Original:  On Monday, an Airbus A380, operating as Air France Flight 007, collided with a , operating as Comair flight 553/ flight 6293 in Delta Connection livery, on a taxiway at in New York City.
Revised: An Air France Airbus A380 On Monday, an Airbus A380, operating as Air France Flight 007, collided with a , operating as Comair flight 553/ flight 6293 in Delta Connection livery, on a taxiway at in New York City.
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Original: The Comair jet had just arrived from Boston , and was stopped on the tarmac, awaiting a gate to offload passengers.
Revised: The Comair jet had just arrived from , and was stopped on the tarmac, awaiting a gate to offload passengers.
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Original: One day after France began enforcing a ban on the public wearing Islamic veils, " Niqabs " or sometimes called "Burqas", French police briefly detained two veiled women.
Revised: One day after France began enforcing a ban on the public wearing Islamic veils, " " or sometimes called "Burqas", French police briefly detained two veiled women.
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Original: One day after France began enforcing a ban on the public wearing Islamic veils, "  " or sometimes called " Burqas ", French police briefly detained two veiled women.
Revised: One day after began enforcing a ban on the public wearing Islamic veils, " " or sometimes called " Burqas ", French police briefly detained two veiled women.
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Original: One day after France began enforcing a ban on the public wearing Islamic veils, "  " or sometimes called " Burqas ", French police briefly detained two veiled women.
Revised: One day after France began enforcing a ban on the public wearing Islamic veils, " " or sometimes called " ", French police briefly detained two veiled women.
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Original:  The new French law is hotly-debated.
Revised:  The new is hotly-debated.
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Original:  The women who defied the ban by walking outside the famed Notre Dame Cathedral in Paris may now face fines of up to $217 (150 Euros), community service and/or a citizenship course, under the new law.
Revised:  The women who defied the ban by walking outside the famed in Paris may now face fines of up to $217 (150 Euros), community service and/or a citizenship course, under the new law.
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Original:  The French Constitutional Council says the law does not impose disproportionate punishments or prevent the free exercise of religion in a place of worship, finding therefore that "the law conforms to the Constitution."
Revised:  The says the law does not impose disproportionate punishments or prevent the free exercise of religion in a place of worship, finding therefore that "the law conforms to the Constitution."
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Original: One day after began enforcing a ban on the public wearing Islamic veils  , "Niqabs" or sometimes called "", French police briefly detained two veiled women.
Revised: One day after began enforcing a ban on the public wearing Islamic veils , French police briefly detained two veiled women.
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Original:  The new is hotly-debated .
Revised:  The new is hotly debated .
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Original:  Activist auctioned one of his homes to provide money to pay the $  150 euro fine of any woman arrested for wearing the forbidden garments.
Revised:  Activist auctioned one of his homes to provide money to pay the $ Activist auctioned one of his homes to provide money to pay the 150 euro fine of any woman arrested for wearing the forbidden garments.
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Original:  The police later claimed that they were arrested for joining an unauthorized protest and not specifically because of veils they were wearing  .
Revised:  The police later claimed that the women were arrested for joining an unauthorized protest and not specifically because of veils they were wearing .
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Original:  The police later claimed that they were arrested for joining an unauthorized protest and not specifically because of veils they were wearing  .
Revised:  The police later claimed that they were arrested for taking part in an unauthorized protest and not specifically because of veils they were wearing .
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Original:  The police later claimed that they were arrested for joining an unauthorized protest and not specifically because of veils they were wearing  .
Revised:  The police later claimed that they were arrested for joining an unauthorized protest , not because they were wearing .
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Original:  The women who defied the ban by walking outside the famed in Paris  may now face fines of up to 217 (150 ), community service and/or a citizenship course , under the new law.
Revised:  The women who defied the ban by walking outside the famed in Paris , and may now face fines of up to 217 (150 ), community service and/or a citizenship course , under the new law.
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Original:  While the ban covers the burqa and the niqāb, it does not include the hijab or the chador .
Revised:  While the ban covers the burqa and the niqāb, it does not include the or the .
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Original:  The hijab , which covers the hair and neck but not the face , and the chador , which covers the body but not the face, apparently are not banned by the law that has sparked an uproar around freedom of religion in France .
Revised:  The hijab , which covers the hair and neck , and the chador , which covers the body but not the face, apparently are not banned by the law that has sparked an uproar around freedom of religion in France .
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Original:  The hijab , which covers the hair and neck but not the face , and the chador , which covers the body but not the face, apparently are not banned by the law that has sparked an uproar around freedom of religion in France .
Revised:  The hijab , which covers the hair and neck but not the face , and the chador covers only the body .
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Original:  Those who oppose the new law say it limits and , while supporters claim many women are forced into wearing the veils and the law is intended to empower those women, as well as increase public security.
Revised:  Those who oppose the new law say it limits and , while supporters claim that women are degraded by wearing veils and the law is intended to empower those women, as well as increase public security.
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Original:  Although the wearing of a burqa or niqāb is not mandated in the , many Muslim women feel strongly about the practice.
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Original:  The French government, in defense of the ban, said that it was required because the veils were not only "undermining the basic standards for living in a shared society" but also "relegating the wearers to an inferior status " in a country where everybody is considered equal.
Revised:  The French government, in defense of the ban, said that it was required because the veils were not only "undermining the basic standards for living in a country where everybody is considered equal.
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Original:  French Prime Minister last month defended the ban as being " in keeping with national values".
Revised:  French Prime Minister has said that the ban is consistent with the national values of France. " in keeping with national values".
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Original:  French Prime Minister last month defended the ban as being " in keeping with national values".
Revised:  French Prime Minister last month defended the ban as being " 
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Original:  " The French Republic lives in a bare-headed fashion," he said in an official government newspaperexplaining the law .
Revised:  The French Republic lives in a bare-headed fashion," he said in an official government newspaperexplaining the law .
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Original:  " The French Republic lives in a bare-headed fashion," he said in an official government newspaperexplaining the law .
Revised:  " The French Republic lives in a bare-headed fashion," he said in a statement published by a government newspaper .
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Original:  The French government said that they do not wish to make France an unfriendly place for Muslims to live ;
Revised:  The French government previously made efforts to accommodate Muslims in the country, including establishing a council dealing with the presence of Islam ;
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Original:  however,  some Muslims in the country say that they feel like they are under assault by the government.
Revised:  however, some Muslims in the country say that they feel as though they are under assault by the government.
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Original:  Some have reported feeling resentful of " the fact that they are not allowed to be both Muslim and French."
Revised:  She said that some are "resentful of the fact that they are not allowed to be both Muslim and French."
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Original:  The French government is most concerned with women and children who are forced to veil themselves.
Revised:  The French government is also concerned with women and children who are forced to veil themselves.
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Original:  The government has called such coercion "a new form of enslavement that the republic cannot accept on its soil."
Revised:  It has said that such an action is "a new form of enslavement that the republic cannot accept on its soil."
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Original:  Forcing a woman to wear a niqāb or a burqa is punishable by a year in prison and a 30,000 euro fine (about $43,300).
Revised:  There is a fine of 30,000 euro fine (about $43,300).
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Original:  Activist auctioned one of his homes to provide money to pay the $150 euro fine of any woman arrested for wearing the forbidden garments . "I would like to send a clear message to President Nicolas Sarkozy that we can do what we want.
Revised:  Activist auctioned one of his homes to provide money to pay the fine for any woman arrested for wearing the forbidden garments . "I would like to send a clear message to President Nicolas Sarkozy that we can do what we want.
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Original:  Activist auctioned one of his homes to provide money to pay the $150 euro fine of any woman arrested for wearing the forbidden garments . "I would like to send a clear message to President Nicolas Sarkozy that we can do what we want.
Revised:  Activist auctioned one of his homes to provide money to pay the $150 euro fine of any woman arrested under the law . "I would like to send a clear message to President Nicolas Sarkozy that we can do what we want.
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Original:  The says the law does not impose disproportionate punishments or prevent the free exercise of religion in a place of worship , finding therefore that "the law conforms to the Constitution. "
Revised:  According to the , the law "conforms to the Constitution" because it does not limit the freedom of religion or excessively punish people for exercising that right in a place of worship , finding therefore that "the law conforms to the Constitution. "
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Original:  The says the law does not impose disproportionate punishments or prevent the free exercise of religion in a place of worship , finding therefore that "the law conforms to the Constitution. "
Revised:  The says the law does not impose disproportionate punishments or prevent the free exercise of religion in a place of worship .
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Original:  Ousted Egyptian president Hosni Mubarak has been hospitalised this afternoon after reports his health was deteriorating.
Revised: File:Hosni Mubarak 2003.jpg|120px|Hosni Mubarak pictured in 2003. Ousted Egyptian president Hosni Mubarak has been hospitalised this afternoon after reports his health was deteriorating.
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Original: File:Hosni Mubarak 2003.jpg|120px|Hosni Mubarak pictured in 2003.
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Original:  In a statement,  , “The Museum of Flight put a tremendous amount of effort into landing a retired shuttle in the Pacific Northwest.
Revised:  In a statement, said , “The Museum of Flight put a tremendous amount of effort into landing a retired shuttle in the Pacific Northwest.
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Original:  NASA Administrator Charles Bolden announces where four space shuttle orbiters will be permanently displayed at the conclusion of the Space Shuttle Program during an event commemorating the 30th anniversay of the first shuttle launch on April 12, 2011. celebrated the launch of the first space shuttle Tuesday at an event at the (KSC) in . On April 12, 1981, lifted off from the Kennedy Space Center on , the first space shuttle mission.
Revised:  celebrated the launch of the first space shuttle Tuesday at an event at the (KSC) in . On April 12, 1981, lifted off from the Kennedy Space Center on , the first space shuttle mission.
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Original:  While the Museum of Flight was in the top running, I’m disappointed that NASA did not choose them. "
Revised:  While the Museum of Flight was in the top running, I’m disappointed that NASA did not choose them. 
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Original:  Many major companies including eBay, Google.com, and AOL.com are helping enable donations through the web .
Revised:  Many major companies including eBay, Google.com, and AOL.com are helping enable donations through the web 
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Original:  Many major companies including Apple Computer, Microsoft, Cisco, eBay, Google .com , and AOL .com are helping enable donations through the web
Revised:  Many major companies including Apple Computer, Microsoft, Cisco, eBay, Google , and AOL .com are helping enable donations through the web
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Original:  Many major companies including Apple Computer, Microsoft, Cisco, eBay, Google .com , and AOL .com are helping enable donations through the web
Revised:  Many major companies including Apple Computer, Microsoft, Cisco, eBay, Google .com , and AOL are helping enable donations through the web
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Original: On April 12, 1961, Soviet cosmonaut w: Yuri Gagarin lifted off on Vostok 1, the first human spaceflight in history, completing one orbit of the Earth in just under two hours.
Revised: On April 12, 1961, Soviet cosmonaut Yuri Gagarin lifted off on Vostok 1, the first human spaceflight in history, completing one orbit of the Earth in just under two hours.
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Original: , the first human in space, during a 1964 visit to Sweden.
Revised: , the first human to visit space, during a 1964 visit to Sweden.
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Original:  The movie, produced by filmmaker Christopher Riley, was filmed by astronaut and matches  radio communications, times, and views of the flight.
Revised:  The movie, produced by filmmaker Christopher Riley, was filmed by astronaut and matches the radio communications, times, and views of the flight.
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Original: The crew on board the International Space Station (ISS) also today marked the fiftieth anniversary by delivering a message from space.
Revised: The crew on board the International Space Station (ISS) also marked the fiftieth anniversary by delivering a message from space.
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Original: On April 12, 1961, Soviet cosmonaut Yuri Gagarin lifted off on Vostok 1 , the first human spaceflight in history, completing one orbit of the Earth in just under two hours.
Revised: On April 12, 1961, cosmonaut lifted off on Vostok 1 , the first human spaceflight in history, completing one orbit of the Earth in just under two hours.
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Original: On April 12, 1961, Soviet cosmonaut Yuri Gagarin lifted off on Vostok 1 , the first human spaceflight in history, completing one orbit of the Earth in just under two hours.
Revised: On April 12, 1961, Soviet cosmonaut Yuri Gagarin lifted off on , the first human spaceflight in history, completing one orbit of the Earth in just under two hours.
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Original:  Tuesday marks the anniversary of Gagarin's flight and fifty years of human space travel . Celebrations are to take place all over the world and aboard the . , started in 2001 for fortieth anniversary celebrations, is a global celebration of the history of spaceflight, including the first on April 12, 1981, the twentieth anniversary of Gagarin's flight.
Revised:  Tuesday marks the anniversary of Gagarin's flight and fifty years of . Celebrations are to take place all over the world and aboard the . , started in 2001 for fortieth anniversary celebrations, is a global celebration of the history of spaceflight, including the first on April 12, 1981, the twentieth anniversary of Gagarin's flight.
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Original:  Tuesday marks the anniversary of Gagarin's flight and fifty years of human space travel . Celebrations are to take place all over the world and aboard the . , started in 2001 for fortieth anniversary celebrations, is a global celebration of the history of spaceflight, including the first on April 12, 1981, the twentieth anniversary of Gagarin's flight.
Revised:  Tuesday marks the anniversary of Gagarin's flight and fifty years of human space travel . Celebrations were to take place all over the world and aboard the . , started in 2001 for fortieth anniversary celebrations, is a global celebration of the history of spaceflight, including the first on April 12, 1981, the twentieth anniversary of Gagarin's flight.
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Original:  There will be more than 400 events in 71 countries celebrating Yuri's Night this year.
Revised:  There were to be more than 400 events in 71 countries celebrating Yuri's Night this year.
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Original: Ohio inmate Clarence Carter, 49, was executed at Tuesday for beating to death a fellow prisoner in a jail house argument over what to watch on TV, the third inmate to be executed this year by the state.
Revised: Ohio inmate Clarence Carter, 49, was at Tuesday for beating to death a fellow prisoner in a jail house argument over what to watch on TV, the third inmate to be executed this year by the state.
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Original:  He died at 10:25 a.m. by lethal injection at the Southern Ohio Correctional Facility , the second inmate in the nation executed using the surgical sedative pentobarbital as a stand-alone execution drug.
Revised:  He died at 10:25 a.m. by at the , the second inmate in the nation executed using the surgical sedative pentobarbital as a stand-alone execution drug.
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Original:  He died at 10:25 a.m. by lethal injection at the Southern Ohio Correctional Facility , the second inmate in the nation executed using the surgical sedative pentobarbital as a stand-alone execution drug.
Revised:  He died at 10:25 a.m. by lethal injection at the Southern Ohio Correctional Facility , the second inmate in the U.S. executed using the surgical sedative pentobarbital as a stand-alone execution drug.
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Original:  He died at 10:25 a.m. by lethal injection at the Southern Ohio Correctional Facility , the second inmate in the nation executed using the surgical sedative pentobarbital as a stand-alone execution drug.
Revised:  He died at 10:25 a.m. by lethal injection at the Southern Ohio Correctional Facility , the second inmate in the nation executed using the surgical sedative as a stand-alone execution drug.
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Original:  No members of the victim's family was there.
Revised:  No members of the victim's family were there.
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Original:  Only two media representatives attended the execution, the lowest number since Ohio resumed the death penalty in 1999 , and only five people protested outside the prison walls
Revised:  Only two media representatives attended the execution, the lowest number since Ohio resumed the death penalty in 1999 ; five people protested outside the prison walls
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Original:  Carter was incarcerated at the Hamilton County Jail Annex in Cincinnati, Ohio, awaiting sentencing for the aggravated murder of Michael Hadnot, when he beat fellow inmate Johnny Allen in December 1988.
Revised:  Carter was incarcerated at the Hamilton County Jail Annex in , awaiting sentencing for the aggravated murder of Michael Hadnot, when he beat fellow inmate Johnny Allen in December 1988.
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Original:  Allen was being held on a theft charge.
Revised:  Allen was jailed on a theft charge.
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Original:  The prosecutor general confirmed Mubarak and his two sons, and , had been detained for 15 days . Mubarak remains in hospital today after suffering a heart attack while being questioned by Egyptian officials yesterday  
Revised:  The prosecutor general confirmed Mubarak and his two sons, and , had been detained for 15 days . Mubarak remains in hospital after suffering a heart attack while being questioned by Egyptian officials yesterday 
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Original:  The prosecutor general confirmed Mubarak and his two sons, and , had been detained for 15 days . Mubarak remains in hospital today after suffering a heart attack while being questioned by Egyptian officials yesterday  
Revised:  The prosecutor general confirmed Mubarak and his two sons, and , had been detained for 15 days . Mubarak remains in hospital today after suffering a heart attack while being questioned by Egyptian officials yesterday . 
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Original: One of Kentucky's newest state lawmakers, who also serves as a high school teacher, sustained a critical head injury Tuesday morning while intervening to break up a fight between two students in the school's cafeteria.
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Original:  State Rep. DeWayne Bunch (R), 49, was listed in "extremely critical" condition when he was taken to the Baptist Regional Medical Center in Corbin, Ky., immediately following the fight between two male teens.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bunch was reported as being unconcious and bleeding from the ears when emergency responders arrived at Whitley County High School.
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Original: One of Kentucky 's newest state lawmakers, who also serves as a high school teacher, sustained a critical head injury Tuesday morning while intervening to break up a fight between two students in the school's cafeteria.
Revised: One of 's newest state lawmakers, who also serves as a high school teacher, sustained a critical head injury Tuesday morning while intervening to break up a fight between two students in the school's cafeteria.
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Original:  The fight  was caught by a surveillance camera which showed Bunch being punched by a 16-year-old, according to the sheriff.
Revised:  The fight was caught by a surveillance camera which showed Bunch being punched by the 16-year-old, according to the sheriff.
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Original:  It's not clear what started the fight  which took place in the school's cafeteria during breakfast.
Revised:  It's not clear what started the fight , which took place in the school's cafeteria during breakfast.
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