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Original: In general, modern scientific deep-sea exploration can be said to have begun when French scientist Pierre Simon de Laplace investigated the average depth of the Atlantic ocean by observing tidal motions registered on Brazilian and African coasts.
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Original:  A provincial general election will be held in Saskatchewan in November, 2011. URL
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Original: 20th-century Canadian journalists Category:21st-century Canadian journalists Category:20th-century First Nations people Category:21st-century First Nations people Category:Canadian television news anchors Category:Canadian women television journalists Category:Candidates in Saskatchewan provincial elections Category:Cree people Category:Dene people Category:First Nations journalists Category:Indspire Awards Category:People from Regina, Saskatchewan Category:Women in Northwest Territories politi
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Original:  Evans studied in a Japanese primary school in Keningau during the occupation.
Revised: Education Evans studied in a Japanese primary school in Keningau during the occupation.
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Original:   Evans had a distinguished career as a politician in Sabah.
Revised:  Political Career Evans had a distinguished career as a politician in Sabah.
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Original:   He died on 27 September 2017 at the age of 82 years old.
Revised:  Death He died on 27 September 2017 at the age of 82 years old.
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Original: Evans also served as a Justice of the Peace, and is a life member of the Commonwealth Parliamentary Association and the Malaysian Parliamentary Association.
Revised: Evans also served as a Justice of the Peace, and was a life member of the Commonwealth Parliamentary Association and the Malaysian Parliamentary Association.
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Original:  He is fluent in English, Malay, Kadazan/Dusun and Murut.
Revised:  He was fluent in English, Malay, Kadazan/Dusun and Murut.
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Original: Death He died on 27 September 2017 at the age of 82 years old.
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Original:  Musa Aman, Sabah’s chief minister  called on the family residence here to pay his last respects.
Revised:  Musa Aman, Sabah’s chief minister , called on the family residence here to pay his last respects.
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Original:  Musa Aman, Sabah’s chief minister  called on the family residence here to pay his last respects.
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Original:  After the war he was schooled at Catholic mission schools at Sandakan, at Jesselton (now Kota Kinabalu) and at Kuching, Sarawak.
Revised:  After the war he was schooled at Catholic mission schools at Sandakan, in Jesselton (now Kota Kinabalu) and at Kuching, Sarawak.
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Original:  After the war he was schooled at Catholic mission schools at Sandakan, at Jesselton (now Kota Kinabalu) and at Kuching, Sarawak.
Revised:  After the war he was schooled at Catholic mission schools at Sandakan, at Jesselton (now Kota Kinabalu) as well as in Kuching, Sarawak.
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Original:  After the war he was schooled at Catholic mission schools at Sandakan, in Jesselton (now Kota Kinabalu) as well as in Kuching, Sarawak.
Revised:  After the war he was schooled at Catholic mission schools at Sandakan, at Jesselton (now Kota Kinabalu) as well as in Kuching, Sarawak.
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Original:  After the war he was schooled at Catholic mission schools at Sandakan, in Jesselton (now Kota Kinabalu) as well as in Kuching, Sarawak.
Revised:  After the war he was schooled at Catholic mission schools at Sandakan, in Jesselton (now Kota Kinabalu) and at Kuching, Sarawak.
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Original:  He also engaged in marital alliances, by marrying his daughters to rulers of eastern territories, such as Anshan , Marhashi and Bashime.
Revised:  He also engaged in marital alliances, by marrying his daughters to rulers of eastern territories, such as Anšan , Marhashi and Bashime.
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Original: Shulgi ( dŠulgi, formerly read as Dungi) of Ur was the second king of the Third Dynasty of Ur during the Sumerian Renaissance .
Revised: Shulgi ( dŠulgi, formerly read as Dungi) of Ur was the second king of the Third Dynasty of Ur .
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Original: Dehydroretinal also called vitamin A2-aldehyde, is a derivative (metabolite) of retinal.
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Original: Dehydroretinal , more specific 3,4-dehydroretinal, is a derivative (metabolite) of retinal.
Revised: Dehydroretinal is a derivative (metabolite) of retinal.
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Original:  Belonging to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3 , 4-dehydroretinol and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid and it is found in the human nutrition chain in fish liver oils.
Revised:  Known as vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3 , 4-dehydroretinol and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid and it is found in the human nutrition chain in fish liver oils.
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Original:  Belonging to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3 , 4-dehydroretinol and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid and it is found in the human nutrition chain in fish liver oils.
Revised:  Belonging to the group of vitamin A2 , 4-dehydroretinol and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid and it is found in the human nutrition chain in fish liver oils.
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Original:  Belonging to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3 , 4-dehydroretinol and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid and it is found in the human nutrition chain in fish liver oils.
Revised:  Belonging to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3 , it is found in the human nutrition chain in fish liver oils.
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Original:  Belonging to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3 , 4-dehydroretinol and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid and it is found in the human nutrition chain in fish liver oils.
Revised:  Belonging to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3 , 4-dehydroretinol and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid and it is found in fish liver oils.
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Original: Dehydroretinal, more specific 3,4-dehydroretinal, is a derivative (metabolite ) of retinal . Belonging to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3,4-dehydroretinol and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid and it is found in the human nutrition chain in fish liver oils .
Revised: Dehydroretinal, more specific 3,4-dehydroretinal, is a derivative metabolite of retinal belonging to the group of vitamin A2 as a retinaldehyde form, besides the endogenously present 3,4-dehydroretinol and 3,4-dehydroretinoic acid and it is found in the human nutrition chain in fish liver oils .
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Original:  The liver  of freshwater fishes, and some fish found in India, contain a higher ratio of dehydroretinal to retinal than do other breeds .
Revised:  The liver The livers of freshwater fishes, and some fish found in India, contain a higher ratio of dehydroretinal to retinal than do other breeds .
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Original:  The liver  of freshwater fishes, and some fish found in India, contain a higher ratio of dehydroretinal to retinal than do other breeds .
Revised:  The liver of freshwater fishes, and some fish found in India, contain a higher ratio of dehydroretinal to retinal than do other species .
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Original:   See also Retinene References
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Original:   See also Retinene References
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Original:  References See also Retinene  Category:Vision Category:Signal transduction Category:Apocarotenoids Category:Photosynthetic pigmen
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Original:  Etymologically, the word smerd comes from the common Indo-European root meaning "ordinary man" or "dependent man".
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Original: A smerd () was a free  and later a feudal-dependent peasant in the medieval Slavic states of East Europe.
Revised: A smerd () was a free peasant and later a feudal-dependent peasant in the medieval Slavic states of East Europe.
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Original: Michael B. McElroy (born May 18, 1939) is  Gilbert Butler Professor of Environmental Studies at Harvard University.
Revised: Michael B. McElroy (born May 18, 1939) is the Gilbert Butler Professor of Environmental Studies at Harvard University.
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Original:  Publications A 1984 paper he co-authored with Steven Wofsy and Michael J. Prather on potential non-linear destruction of the ozone layer helped persuade the United States Environmental Protection Agency to carry out a risk assessment of chlorofluorocarbons that laid the groundwork for the negotiation of the Montreal Protocol .
Revised:  Selected publications A 1984 paper he co-authored with Steven Wofsy and Michael J. Prather on potential non-linear destruction of the ozone layer helped persuade the United States Environmental Protection Agency to carry out a risk assessment of chlorofluorocarbons that laid the groundwork for the negotiation of the Montreal Protocol .
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Original:  Publications A 1984 paper he co-authored with Steven Wofsy and Michael J. Prather on potential non-linear destruction of the ozone layer helped persuade the United States Environmental Protection Agency to carry out a risk assessment of chlorofluorocarbons that laid the groundwork for the negotiation of the Montreal Protocol .
Revised:  Publications A 1984 paper he co-authored with Steven Wofsy and Michael J. Prather on potential non-linear destruction of the ozone layer helped persuade the United States Environmental Protection Agency to carry out a risk assessment of chlorofluorocarbons that laid the groundwork for the negotiation of the Montreal Protocol 
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Original:  McElroy is also the author of an atmospheric science textbook, The Atmospheric Environment: Effects of Human Activity .
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Original: Showmanship, concerning artistic performing such as in Theatre, is the skill of performing in such a manner that will either appeal to an audience or aid in conveying the performance's essential theme or message.
Revised: Showmanship, concerning artistic performing such as in Theatre, is the skill of performing in such a manner that will appeal to an audience or aid in conveying the performance's essential theme or message.
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Original:  However, he made the old material seem new by both by rejecting the old stylistic cliches of the art  such as wearing formal wear  , and by presenting them with a childlike exuberance that respected the audience's intelligence.   
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Original:  However, he made the old material seem new by both by rejecting the old stylistic cliches of the art  such as wearing formal wear  , and by presenting them with a childlike exuberance that respected the audience's intelligence.   
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Original:  However, he made the old material seem new by both by rejecting the old stylistic cliches of the art  such as wearing formal wear  , and by presenting them with a childlike exuberance that respected the audience's intelligence.   
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Original:  However, he made the old material seem new by both by rejecting the old stylistic cliches of the art  such as wearing formal wear  , and by presenting them with a childlike exuberance that respected the audience's intelligence.   
Revised:  However, he made the old material seem new by both by rejecting the old stylistic cliches of the art such as wearing formal wear , and by presenting them with a childlike exuberance that respected the audience's intelligence. URL
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Original:  Showmen aim to display goods with tact in order to sell an object or a show.
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Original:  URL Companies producing drama and entertainment claim that displaying fairness is URL Footnotes URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References
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Original:  Showmen aim to display goods with tact in order to sell an object or a URL Companies producing drama and entertainment claim that displaying fairness is URL
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Original:  Showmen aim to display goods with tact in order to sell an object or a URL Companies producing drama and entertainment claim that displaying fairness is necessary.
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Original: McLoskey was elected as a Republican in the Illinois Nineteenth District to the Eighty-eighth Congress (January 3, 1963-January 3, 1965).
Revised: McLoskey was elected as a Republican in the Illinois Nineteenth District to the Eighty-eighth Congress (January 3, 1963 – January 3, 1965).
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Original: Born in Monmouth, Illinois, McLoskey graduated from Monmouth High School , Monmouth, Illinois , 1924.  B.A. , Monmouth College, Monmouth, Illinois , 1928.
Revised: Born in Monmouth, Illinois, McLoskey graduated from Monmouth High School in Monmouth, Illinois , 1924. B.A. , Monmouth College, Monmouth, Illinois , 1928.
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Original: Born in Monmouth, Illinois, McLoskey graduated from Monmouth High School , Monmouth, Illinois , 1924.  B.A. , Monmouth College, Monmouth, Illinois , 1928.
Revised: Born in Monmouth, Illinois, McLoskey graduated from Monmouth High School , Monmouth, Illinois in 1924. B.A. , Monmouth College, Monmouth, Illinois , 1928.
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Original: Born in Monmouth, Illinois, McLoskey graduated from Monmouth High School , Monmouth, Illinois , 1924.  B.A. , Monmouth College, Monmouth, Illinois , 1928.
Revised: Born in Monmouth, Illinois, McLoskey graduated from Monmouth High School , Monmouth, Illinois , 1924. He received his B.A. , Monmouth College, Monmouth, Illinois , 1928.
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Original: Born in Monmouth, Illinois, McLoskey graduated from Monmouth High School , Monmouth, Illinois , 1924.  B.A. , Monmouth College, Monmouth, Illinois , 1928.
Revised: Born in Monmouth, Illinois, McLoskey graduated from Monmouth High School , Monmouth, Illinois , 1924. B.A. from Monmouth College, Monmouth, Illinois , 1928.
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Original:  Certificate in mortuary science, Worsham College , Chicago, Illinois , 1932.
Revised:  Certificate in mortuary science, Worsham College , Chicago, Illinois in 1932.
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Original:  Field supervisor , Bureau of Vital Statistics, Illinois Department of Public Health  from 1940 to 1950.
Revised:  Field supervisor , Bureau of Vital Statistics, Illinois Department of Public Health 's Bureau of Vital Statistics from 1940 to 1950.
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Original:  McLoskey was elected as a Republican in the IllinoisNineteenth District to the Eighty-eighth Congress (January 3, 1963 – January 3, 1965).
Revised:  McLoskey was elected as a Republican in Illinois's 19th District to the Eighty-eighth Congress (January 3, 1963 – January 3, 1965).
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Original:   Interned during World War II, he afterwards worked with Oswald Pirow's New Order.
Revised:  He was Interned during World War II, he afterwards worked with Oswald Pirow's New Order.
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Original:   Interned during World War II, he afterwards worked with Oswald Pirow's New Order.
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Original: Louis Theodor Weichardt ( May 21 , 1894-October 26 , 1985) was a South African political leader who founded the Greyshirts, a National Socialist organization.
Revised: Louis Theodor Weichardt ( 21 , 1894-October 26 , 1985) was a South African political leader who founded the Greyshirts, a National Socialist organization.
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Original: Louis Theodor Weichardt ( May 21 , 1894-October 26 , 1985) was a South African political leader who founded the Greyshirts, a National Socialist organization.
Revised: Louis Theodor Weichardt ( May 21 May 1894 – 26 , 1985) was a South African political leader who founded the Greyshirts, a National Socialist organization.
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Original:  In Cape Town, on October 26 , 1933, he founded the South African Christian National Socialist Movement with a paramilitary section (modeled on Nazi Germany's brown-shirted Sturmabteilung) called the Gryshemde or Grayshirts.
Revised:  In Cape Town, on 26 , 1933, he founded the South African Christian National Socialist Movement with a paramilitary section (modeled on Nazi Germany's brown-shirted Sturmabteilung) called the Gryshemde or Grayshirts.
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Original: In Cape Town, on 26 October 1933, he founded the South African Christian National Socialist Snake Movement with a paramilitary section (modeled on Nazi Germany's brown-shirted Sturmabteilung) called the Gryshemde or Grayshirts.
Revised: In Cape Town, on 26 October 1933, he founded the South African Christian National Socialist Movement with a paramilitary section (modeled on Nazi Germany's brown-shirted Sturmabteilung) called the Gryshemde or Grayshirts.
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Original: In Cape Town, on 26 October 1933, he founded the South African Christian National Socialist  Movement with a paramilitary section (modeled on Nazi Germany's brown-shirted Sturmabteilung) called the Gryshemde or Grayshirts.
Revised: In Cape Town, on 26 October 1933, he founded the South African Christian National Socialist Spider Movement with a paramilitary section (modeled on Nazi Germany's brown-shirted Sturmabteilung) called the Gryshemde or Grayshirts.
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Original: The peer jury process is often used in the arts to assess applications for grants, proposals for exhibitions made in response to an open call for submissions and art competitions.
Revised: ''The pee jury process is often used in the arts to assess applications for grants, proposals for exhibitions made in response to an open call for submissions and art competitions.
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Original:  Like the practice of peer review used in the academic sphere, a peer jury brings to an evaluation process expertise that an organization or agency awarding grants or sponsoring a competition might not itself have.
Revised:  Like the practice of pee review used in the academic sphere, a peer jury brings to an evaluation process expertise that an organization or agency awarding grants or sponsoring a competition might not itself have.
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Original:  A peer jury in the arts context is generally comprised of artists selected to be representative of those working in a relevant discipline or area.
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Original:  In principle the peer jury process is an effective way for arts councils and other agencies to be responsive to and engaged with the constituencies they serve, and in touch with the latest developments in contemporary art. peer review
Revised:  In principle the pee jury process is an effective way for arts councils and other agencies to be responsive to and engaged with the constituencies they serve, and in touch with the latest developments in contemporary art. peer review
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Original:  In principle the peer jury process is an effective way for arts councils and other agencies to be responsive to and engaged with the constituencies they serve, and in touch with the latest developments in contemporary art. peer review
Revised:  In principle the peer jury process is an effective way for arts councils and other agencies to be responsive to and engaged with the constituencies they serve, and in touch with the latest developments in contemporary art. pee review
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