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Original:  Lt Josh Nelson of the Coast Guard said  " We are throwing everything we can at this right now," and stated that the crews were trained in survival techniques
Revised:  Lt Josh Nelson of the Coast Guard said " we are throwing everything we can at this right now," and stated that the crews were trained in survival techniques
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Original:  Lt Josh Nelson of the Coast Guard said  " We are throwing everything we can at this right now," and stated that the crews were trained in survival techniques
Revised:  Lt Josh Nelson of the Coast Guard said " We are throwing everything we can at this right now," adding that the crews were trained in survival techniques
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Original:  A file photo of a C-130 transport plane Searchers from the Navy and Coast Guard have found floating devris from the aircraft.
Revised:  A file photo of a C-130 transport plane Searchers from the Navy and Coast Guard have found floating debris from the aircraft.
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Original:  The collision occured roughly 15 miles from San Clemente Island, and a pilot in the area witnessed a fireball.
Revised:  The collision occurred roughly 15 miles from San Clemente Island, and a pilot in the area witnessed a fireball.
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Original:  As a result, numerous landslides are likely to occur    
Revised:  As a result, numerous landslides are likely to occur . 
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Original:  As a result, numerous landslides are likely to occur    
Revised:  As a result, numerous landslides are likely to occur "Considering our land is already saturated with water, it may cause flooding in some areas. It is hard to tell if there will be floods but we are preparing for the worst," said a civil defence office spokesman. 
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Original:  As a result, numerous landslides are likely to occur .
Revised:  As a result, numerous landslides are likely .
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Original: (Paris) Jacques Chirac (File) A French magistrate has ordered former President Jacques Chirac to stand trial on embezzlement charges dating back to the 1990s, when he was mayor of Paris.
Revised:  Jacques Chirac (File) A French magistrate has ordered former President Jacques Chirac to stand trial on embezzlement charges dating back to the 1990s, when he was mayor of Paris.
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Original: (Paris) Jacques Chirac (File) A French magistrate has ordered former President Jacques Chirac to stand trial on embezzlement charges dating back to the 1990s, when he was mayor of Paris.
Revised: (Paris) A French magistrate has ordered former President Jacques Chirac to stand trial on embezzlement charges dating back to the 1990s, when he was mayor of Paris.
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Original:  Former President Jacques Chirac did not respond directly to news he has been ordered to stand trial, but a statement from his office said he was serene and determined to clear himself.
Revised:  Chirac did not respond directly to news he has been ordered to stand trial, but a statement from his office said he was serene and determined to clear himself.
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Original:  Chirac is charged with embezzlement and breach of trust relating to allegations that 35 people were given fake jobs at Paris city hall between 1994 and 1995, when he was mayor.
Revised:  The former president is charged with embezzlement and breach of trust relating to allegations that 35 people were given fake jobs at Paris city hall between 1994 and 1995, when he was mayor.
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Original:  But international relations professor Steven Ekovich, of the American University of Paris, has his doubts whether Chirac will ever face trial.
Revised:  International relations professor Steven Ekovich, of the American University of Paris, has his doubts whether Chirac will ever face trial.
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Original:  But international relations professor Steven Ekovich, of the American University of Paris, has his doubts whether Chirac will ever face trial.
Revised:  But international relations professor Steven Ekovich, of the American University of Paris, however, expressed doubts as to whether Chirac will ever face trial.
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Original:  "It's a little surprising, but I doubt it's going to go very far, mostly because of his age," said Steven Ekovich . "Maybe mostly because of his age.
Revised:  "It's a little surprising, but I doubt it's going to go very far, mostly because of his age," he said . "Maybe mostly because of his age.
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Original:  While Chirac left the presidency with dismal approval ratings, his popularity has since soared.
Revised:  While Chirac left the presidency with low approval ratings, his popularity has since soared.
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Original:  A ban on public gatherings as well was implemented as well, in some of the toughest measures taken in Europe to stop the virus' spread.
Revised:  A ban on public gatherings was implemented as well, in some of the toughest measures taken in Europe to stop the virus' spread.
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Original: Michael Schumacher has awoken from a medically induced coma, and left  hospital in Grenoble, France.
Revised: Michael Schumacher has awoken from a medically induced coma, and left the hospital in Grenoble, France.
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Original:  Schumacher was medically induced into a coma after suffering severe head trauma following a skiing accident in the French Alps in December last year.
Revised:  Schumacher was induced after suffering severe head trauma following a skiing accident in the French Alps in December last year.
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Original:  Schumacher was medically induced into a coma after suffering severe head trauma following a skiing accident in the French Alps in December last year.
Revised:  Schumacher was medically induced into a coma after suffering severe head trauma following a skiing accident in the French Alps , December last year.
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Original:  The Formula One racer is due to continue rehabilitation at another hospital in Switzerland, expecting to recover there for an extended period of time.
Revised:  The Formula One racer is due to continue rehabilitation at another hospital in Switzerland, expecting to recover for an extended period of time.
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Original:  170 days have passed since Schumacher was placed into intensive care.
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Original:  Schumacher's manager, Sabina Kehm has decided not to reveal what unit that Schumacher is being treated in due to concerns for his privacy surrounding his health and private life.
Revised:  Schumacher's manager, Sabina Kehm has decided not to reveal the unit Schumacher is being treated in due to concerns for his privacy surrounding his health and private life.
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Original:  The statement  released on Monday  is the first to be heard since April when it appeared that Schumacher had appeared to have had occasional moments of consciousness.
Revised:  The statement , released on Monday is the first to be heard since April when it appeared that Schumacher had appeared to have had occasional moments of consciousness.
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Original:  The statement  released on Monday  is the first to be heard since April when it appeared that Schumacher had appeared to have had occasional moments of consciousness.
Revised:  The statement released on Monday , is the first to be heard since April when it appeared that Schumacher had appeared to have had occasional moments of consciousness.
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Original:  The statement  released on Monday  is the first to be heard since April when it appeared that Schumacher had appeared to have had occasional moments of consciousness.
Revised:  The statement released on Monday is the first since April when it appeared that Schumacher had appeared to have had occasional moments of consciousness.
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Original:  The statement  released on Monday  is the first to be heard since April when it appeared that Schumacher had appeared to have had occasional moments of consciousness.
Revised:  The statement released on Monday is the first to be heard since April when it appeared that Schumacher had occasional moments of consciousness.
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Original:  Schumacher is not a stranger to adrenaline rush sports.
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Original:  Even after his retirement from racing he still continued to participate in these activities and was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain in 2009.
Revised:  Even after his retirement from racing he has continued to participate in these activities and was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain in 2009.
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Original:  Even after his retirement from racing he still continued to participate in these activities and was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain in 2009.
Revised:  Even after his retirement from racing he still continued to participate in adrenaline rush activities and was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain in 2009.
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Original:  Even after his retirement from racing he still continued to participate in these activities and was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain in 2009.
Revised:  Even after his retirement from racing he still continued to participate in these activities and was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain , 2009.
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Original: Michael Schumacher has awoken from a medically induced coma , and left the hospital in Grenoble, France.
Revised: Michael Schumacher has awoken from a medically induced coma and left the hospital in Grenoble, France.
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Original:  The Formula One racer is due to continue rehabilitation at another hospital in Switzerland, expecting to recover for an extended period of time  . Schumacher's manager, Sabina Kehm has decided not to reveal the unit Schumacher is being treated in due to concerns for his privacy surrounding his health and private life .
Revised:  The Formula One racer is due to continue rehabilitation at another hospital in Switzerland, expecting to recover for an extended period of time . Schumacher's manager, Sabina Kehm has decided not to reveal the unit Schumacher is being treated in due to concerns for his privacy .
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Original:  The statement, released on Monday, is the first since April when it appeared that Schumacher had occasional moments of consciousness.
Revised:  The statement, released last Monday, was the first since April when it appeared that Schumacher had occasional moments of consciousness.
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Original:  According to neurosurgery professor Tipu Aziz of John Radcliffe Hospital, Schumacher going into rehabilitation “suggests there has been long-term side-effects of his injury”.
Revised:  According to Neurosurgery professor Tipu Aziz of John Radcliffe Hospital, Schumacher going into rehabilitation “suggests there has been long-term side-effects of his injury”.
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Original:   “With rehabilitation, they will try to train him to cope with the disabilities that he has got, to achieve as much life function as possible ,” Aziz said.
Revised:  He continued, “With rehabilitation, they will try to train him to cope with the disabilities that he has got, to achieve as much life function as possible ,” Aziz said.
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Original:  Even after his retirement from racing he has continued to participate in adrenaline rush activities and was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain, 2009.
Revised:  Following his retirement from racing he has continued to participate in adrenaline rush activities and was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain, 2009.
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Original:  Even after his retirement from racing he has continued to participate in adrenaline rush activities and was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain, 2009.
Revised:  Even after his retirement from racing he has continued to participate in adrenaline rush activities . In 2009 he was involved in a motorcycle accident in Spain, 2009.
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Original:  He was released from  hospital only five hours after the incident occurred
Revised:  He was released from the hospital only five hours after the incident occurred
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Original:  He was released from  hospital only five hours after the incident occurred
Revised:  He was released from hospital only five hours afterwards
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Original:  The seven-time Formula One champion will commence rehabilitation in University Hospital in Lausanne, Switzerland where he is expected to stay for an extended period of time for further recovery.
Revised:  He will commence rehabilitation in University Hospital in Lausanne, Switzerland where he is expected to stay for an extended period of time for further recovery.
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Original: Seven-time Formula One champion Michael Schumacher has awoken from a medically induced coma and left the hospital in Grenoble, France . Schumacher was induced after suffering severe head trauma following a skiing accident in the French Alps, December last year.
Revised: Seven-time champion has awoken from a medically induced coma and left the hospital in Grenoble, France . Schumacher was induced after suffering severe head trauma following a skiing accident in the French Alps, December last year.
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Original: Seven-time Formula One champion Michael Schumacher has awoken from a medically induced coma and left the hospital in Grenoble, France . Schumacher was induced after suffering severe head trauma following a skiing accident in the French Alps, December last year.
Revised: Seven-time Formula One champion Michael Schumacher has awoken from a medically induced coma and left the hospital in , . Schumacher was induced after suffering severe head trauma following a skiing accident in the French Alps, December last year.
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Original:  He will commence rehabilitation in University Hospital in Lausanne, Switzerland where he is expected to stay for an extended period of time for further recovery.
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Original:  "It depends very much on the severity of the injury, how young and fit they are." he said .
Revised:  "It depends very much on the severity of the injury, how young and fit they are." he said 
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Original: Security in Copenhagen, the capital of Danmark , was tightened after the attacks on London yesterday when more than 50 people were killed.
Revised: Security in Copenhagen, the capital of Denmark , was tightened after the attacks on London yesterday when more than 50 people were killed.
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Original:  Denmark did support the US led war on Iraq and fears of an attack are rising.
Revised:  Denmark supported the U.S.-led war on Iraq and fears of an attack are rising.
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Original:  We might be safe tomorrow or the next ten years  " said Mikkel Vedby.
Revised:  We might be safe tomorrow or the next ten years . " said Mikkel Vedby.
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Original:  The group that has claimed responsibility for the attacks on London, the "Secret Organisation Group of Al-Qaeda of Jihad Organisation", did issue a statement yesterday where attacks on countries that supported the 'crusades' against Iraq and Afghanistan are threatened.
Revised:  The group that has claimed responsibility for the attacks on London, the "Secret Organisation Group of Al-Qaeda of Jihad Organisation", issued a statement yesterday where attacks on countries that supported the 'crusades' against Iraq and Afghanistan are threatened.
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Original:  The group that has claimed responsibility for the attacks on London, the "Secret Organisation Group of Al-Qaeda of Jihad Organisation", did issue a statement yesterday where attacks on countries that supported the 'crusades' against Iraq and Afghanistan are threatened.
Revised:  The group that has claimed responsibility for the attacks on London, the "Secret Organisation Group of Al-Qaeda of Jihad Organisation", did issue a statement yesterday where attacks on countries that supported the "crusades" against Iraq and Afghanistan are threatened.
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Original:  Denmark safe Anja Dalgaard-Nielsen disagrees and says Denmark is not in danger of being a terrorist target because radical Islamic groups there are to small to be able to organize a attack.
Revised:  Denmark safe Anja Dalgaard-Nielsen disagrees and says Denmark is not in danger of being a terrorist target because radical Islamic groups there are too small to be able to organize a attack.
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Original:  The Danish government does work closely with the United States and the United Kingdom governments because of Iraq and Afghanistan." Like in other countries, security in Denmark has been stepped up at airports, rail stations, ports, the boarders and other public places
Revised:  The Danish government does work closely with the United States and the United Kingdom governments because of Iraq and Afghanistan." As in other countries, security in Denmark has been stepped up at airports, rail stations, ports, the boarders and other public places
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Original:  The Danish government does work closely with the United States and the United Kingdom governments because of Iraq and Afghanistan." Like in other countries, security in Denmark has been stepped up at airports, rail stations, ports, the boarders and other public places
Revised:  The Danish government does work closely with the United States and the United Kingdom governments because of Iraq and Afghanistan." Like in other countries, security in Denmark has been stepped up at airports, rail stations, ports, borders, and other public places
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Original: Denmark safe Anja Dalgaard-Nielsen disagrees and says Denmark is not in danger of being a terrorist target because radical Islamic groups there are too small to be able to organize an attack.
Revised: Denmark safe Anja Dalgaard-Nielsen disagrees and says Denmark is not in danger of being a terrorist target because radical Islamic groups there are too small to be able to organise an attack.
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Original:  The violence comes a day after U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton ended her confrontational visit to the country . During her three-day trip, Clinton questioned why Pakistan has not captured al-Qaida leaders, saying "somebody, somewhere in Pakistan" must know where they are.
Revised:  The violence comes a day after US Secretary of State Hillary Clinton ended her confrontational visit to the country . During her three-day trip, Clinton questioned why Pakistan has not captured al-Qaida leaders, saying "somebody, somewhere in Pakistan" must know where they are.
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Original:  The violence comes a day after U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton ended her confrontational visit to the country . During her three-day trip, Clinton questioned why Pakistan has not captured al-Qaida leaders, saying "somebody, somewhere in Pakistan" must know where they are.
Revised:  The violence comes a day after U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton ended her visit to the country . During her three-day trip, Clinton questioned why Pakistan has not captured al-Qaida leaders, saying "somebody, somewhere in Pakistan" must know where they are.
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Original:  The violence comes a day after U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton ended her confrontational visit to the country . During her three-day trip, Clinton questioned why Pakistan has not captured al-Qaida leaders, saying "somebody, somewhere in Pakistan" must know where they are.
Revised:  The violence comes a day after U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton ended her confrontational visit to the country During her three-day trip, Clinton questioned why Pakistan has not captured al-Qaida leaders, saying "somebody, somewhere in Pakistan" must know where they are.
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Original:  The violence comes a day after U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton ended her confrontational visit to the country . During her three-day trip, Clinton questioned why Pakistan has not captured al-Qaida leaders, saying "somebody, somewhere in Pakistan" must know where they are.
Revised:  The violence comes a day after U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton ended her confrontational visit to the country . 
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Original: (Washington) Officials in Pakistan say a bomb blast killed seven Pakistani soldiers and wounded 11 others Saturday in the northwest.
Revised:  Officials in Pakistan say a bomb blast killed seven Pakistani soldiers and wounded 11 others Saturday in the northwest.
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Original: Officials in Pakistan say a bomb blast killed seven Pakistani soldiers and wounded 11 others Saturday in the northwest .
Revised: Officials in Pakistan have said that a bomb blast killed seven Pakistani soldiers and wounded 11 others Saturday in the northwest .
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Original: Officials in Pakistan say a bomb blast killed seven Pakistani soldiers and wounded 11 others Saturday in the northwest .
Revised: Officials in Pakistan say a bomb blast killed seven Pakistani soldiers and wounded eleven others on Saturday in the northwest .
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Original: Officials in Pakistan say a bomb blast killed seven Pakistani soldiers and wounded 11 others Saturday in the northwest .
Revised: Officials in Pakistan say a bomb blast killed seven Pakistani soldiers and wounded 11 others Saturday in the northwestern part of the country .
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Original:  The chopper went deep into the water body and thus, the exact number of people on board is not known though police officers said that at least one of them has died. .
Revised:  The chopper went deep into the water body and thus, the exact number of people on board is not known though police officers said that at least one of them has died. 
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Original: An Indian Ar Force (IAF) MI-17 chopper hovering over Chenab river in Doda district crashed into the river yesterday as it got caught into a cable fire of a bridge.
Revised: An Indian Air Force (IAF) MI-17 chopper hovering over Chenab river in Doda district crashed into the river yesterday as it got caught into a cable fire of a bridge.
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Original:  The IAF regularly carries suchBaglihar Dam duties to the area.
Revised:  The IAF regularly carries such duties to the area.
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Original: An Indian Air Force (IAF) MI-17 chopper hovering over Chenab river in Doda district crashed into the river yesterday as it got caught into a cable fire of a bridge.
Revised: An Indian Air Force (IAF) MI-17 chopper crashed into the Chenab river in Doda district crashed into the river yesterday as it got caught into a cable fire of a bridge.
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Original:  The occupants of the chopper are not known as it went deep into the water body .
Revised:  The occupants of the chopper are not yet known .
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Original:  The chopper was returning from  Nawapachi of Kishtawar district after supplying ammunitions , food and arms for the troops there.
Revised:  The chopper was returning from the Nawapachi of Kishtawar district after supplying ammunitions , food and arms for the troops there.
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