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Original:  Christian Voice has also campaigned against the musical "Jerry Springer the Opera", believing it to be blasphemous , and attacked what it calls  " the horrors of Hinduism      "
Revised:  Christian Voice has also campaigned against the musical "Jerry Springer the Opera", believing it to be blasphemous . " the horrors of Hinduism "
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Original: Christian Voice, a UK-based Christian evangelical group has announced that it will press for the prosecution, under "hate speech" legislation, of bookshop staff who sell copies of Islam's most sacred text, the Qur'an.
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Original:  The British government will shortly introduce a new law which is intended to ban incitement to religious hatred.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Christian Voice say that their campaign is actually a protest against this new law, which they believe could be used to stop Christian preachers criticising Islam or "explaining the horrors of Hinduism".
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Original:  "If the Qur'an is not hate speech, I don't know what is", Christian Voice director Stephen Green told the Guardian newspaper earlier this week, arguing that the Qur'an incites the killing of non-Muslims.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Christian Voice has previously campaigned against the musical "Jerry Springer the Opera", believing it to be blasphemous.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The British government says that the new law is needed in order to "draw a line in the sand" and protect religious people from attack.
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Original:  But critics say that such protections already exist in British law, and fear that the new legislation, as currently designed, could end up being used inappropriately.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The government insists that the law is intended to "protect the believer, not the belief", and that it will not affect "criticism, commentary or ridicule of faiths"
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Original:  The Finest store, located in the strongly patrolled Wazir Akbar Khan area of Kabul, was popular with foreigners, being located near embassies, a few hundred yards from the British Embassy.
Revised:  The 'Finest' store, located in the strongly patrolled Wazir Akbar Khan area of Kabul, was popular with foreigners, being located near embassies, a few hundred yards from the British Embassy.
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Original:  The suicide bomber opened fire in the store , which was protected by armed guards and was situated near a police checkpoint, before detonating a bomb, resulting in at least eight deaths and six wounded, including a child, both from Afghanistan and abroad.
Revised:  The suicide bomber opened fire in the supermarket , which was protected by armed guards and was situated near a police checkpoint, before detonating a bomb, resulting in at least eight deaths and six wounded, including a child, both from Afghanistan and abroad.
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Original:  The attack breaks the eleven-month respite since the last major attack on civilians  , when fourteen were killed in two separate bombings last Feburary
Revised:  Civilians have been relatively safe since the last major attack on civilians , when fourteen were killed in two separate bombings last Feburary
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Original:  The attack breaks the eleven-month respite since the last major attack on civilians  , when fourteen were killed in two separate bombings last Feburary
Revised:  The attack breaks the eleven-month respite since the last major attack on civilians last Feburary , when fourteen were killed in two separate bombings last Feburary
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Original:  The attack breaks the eleven-month respite since the last major attack on civilians  , when fourteen were killed in two separate bombings last Feburary
Revised:  The attack breaks the eleven-month respite since the last major attack on civilians , when fourteen were killed in two separate bombings 
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Original:  At least eight people have died after a suicide attack at a supermarket in Kabul , Afghanistan.
Revised:  At least eight people have died after a suicide attack at a supermarket in , Afghanistan.
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Original:  The 'Finest' store, located in the strongly patrolled Wazir Akbar Khan area of Kabul, was popular with foreigners, being located near embassies, a few hundred yards from the British Embassy.
Revised:  The 'Finest' store, located in the strongly patrolled area of Kabul, was popular with foreigners, being located near embassies, a few hundred yards from the British Embassy.
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Original: The Ipswich serial murders, which was responsible for the 2006 deaths of five female prostitutes in Ipswich - located in Suffolk, England - is to be turned into a new musical entitled 'London Road' .
Revised: The Ipswich serial murders, in which five female prostitutes in Ipswich - located in Suffolk, England - is to be turned into a new musical entitled 'London Road' .
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Original: The Ipswich serial murders, which was responsible for the 2006 deaths of five female prostitutes in Ipswich - located in Suffolk, England - is to be turned into a new musical entitled 'London Road' .
Revised: The Ipswich serial murders, which was responsible for the 2006 deaths of five female prostitutes in Ipswich - located in Suffolk, England , are to be turned into a new musical entitled 'London Road' .
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Original: The Ipswich serial murders, which was responsible for the 2006 deaths of five female prostitutes in Ipswich - located in Suffolk, England - is to be turned into a new musical entitled 'London Road' .
Revised: The Ipswich serial murders, which was responsible for the 2006 deaths of five female prostitutes in Ipswich - located in Suffolk, England - is to be turned into a musical entitled London Road .
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Original:  The "documentary musical" is expected to debut in the Royal National Theatre in London , England in April2011.
Revised:  The "documentary musical" is expected to debut in the Royal National Theatre in London this April.
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Original:  The concept of a musical in this context has been criticised.
Revised:  The concept has been criticised.
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Original:  When ITN conducted some vox populi interviews, members of the public reacted negatively to the idea of this musical.
Revised:  When ITN conducted some vox populi interviews, members of the public reacted negatively :
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Original:  The Reverend Andrew Dotchin, who knew Ipswich serial murder victim Tania Nicol, advised: "It's holy ground.
Revised:  The Reverend Andrew Dotchin, who knew victim Tania Nicol, advised: "It's holy ground.
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Original:  In their defence, a National Theatre spokeswoman made a statement regarding this musical.
Revised:  In their defence, a National Theatre spokeswoman made a statement , saying
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Original:  The name 'London Road ' is a reference to the name of the street which was the residence of Steve Wright , the man who was jailed in February 2008 for the murders of Tania Nicol, Gemma Adams, Anneli Alderton, Annette Nicholls and Paula Clennell - all of whom were female prostitutes that lived in the Ipswich region.
Revised:  The name London Road is a reference to the name of the street which was the residence of Steve Wright , the man who was jailed in February 2008 for the murders of Tania Nicol, Gemma Adams, Anneli Alderton, Annette Nicholls and Paula Clennell - all of whom were female prostitutes that lived in the Ipswich region.
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Original:  The name 'London Road ' is a reference to the name of the street which was the residence of Steve Wright , the man who was jailed in February 2008 for the murders of Tania Nicol, Gemma Adams, Anneli Alderton, Annette Nicholls and Paula Clennell - all of whom were female prostitutes that lived in the Ipswich region.
Revised:  The name 'London Road ' is a reference to the name of the street where Steve Wright lived. Wright was was jailed in February 2008 for the murders of Tania Nicol, Gemma Adams, Anneli Alderton, Annette Nicholls and Paula Clennell - all of whom were female prostitutes that lived in the Ipswich region.
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Original:  Their naked , deceased bodies were discovered close to Ipswich in December 2006.
Revised:  Their naked bodies were discovered close to Ipswich in December 2006.
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Original: The Ipswich serial murders, in which five female prostitutes were killed in Ipswich, Suffolk, England, are to be turned into a musical entitled London Road.
Revised: The Ipswich serial murders, in which five female prostitutes were killed in Ipswich, Suffolk, England, are to be turned into a show entitled London Road.
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Original:  Previous work estimated the total at 400 billion  ]] 
Revised:  Previous work estimated the total at 400 billion . ]] 
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Original:  The study puts 43\% of trees in the tropics, where deforestation is particularly common    
Revised:  The study puts 43\% of trees in the tropics, where deforestation is particularly common . 
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Original: A study published yesterday by Nature estimates the global tree population at just over three trillion.
Revised: A study published yesterday by estimates the global tree population at just over three trillion.
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Original:  it's not like we've discovered a load of new carbon , " cautions Crowther . "So, it's not good news for the world or bad news that we've produced this new number."
Revised:  it's not like we've discovered a load of new carbon " cautions Crowther . "So, it's not good news for the world or bad news that we've produced this new number."
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Original:  The study suggests there are 422 trees per each person on the planet .
Revised:  The study suggests trees outnumber humans by 422 to one .
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Original:  The study suggests trees outnumber humans by  422 to one.
Revised:  The study suggests trees outnumber humans by around 422 to one.
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Original:  Both had died from gunshot wounds  
Revised:  Both had died from gunshot wounds . 
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Original: 250px|Location map of Thailand In Thailand's troubled southern province of Pattani, a Buddhist monk was among three killed by insurgents attacking a temple.
Revised:  In Thailand's troubled southern province of Pattani, a Buddhist monk was among three killed by insurgents attacking a temple.
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Original:  In an effort to conceal the attack, the insurgents had let off fireworks earlier thus distracting nearby villagers and police . Related New
Revised:  In an effort to conceal the attack, the insurgents had let off fireworks earlier thus distracting nearby villagers and police Related New
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Original:  In an effort to conceal the attack, the insurgents had let off fireworks earlier thus distracting nearby villagers and police . Related New
Revised:  In an effort to conceal the attack, the insurgents had let off fireworks earlier thus distracting nearby villagers and police . 
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Original: Spanish police believe that they are close to capturing Dr. 91-year-old Aribert Hein, according to a British newspaper.
Revised: Spanish police believe that they are close to capturing Aribert Hein, according to a British newspaper.
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Original:  Dr. Hein, described by the Times as "the most wanted Nazi still believed to be alive", is thought to be living in the Costa Brava area of Spain.
Revised:  Dr. Hein, described by The Times as "the most wanted Nazi still believed to be alive", is thought to be living in the Costa Brava area of Spain.
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Original:  Hein reportedly worked as a doctor in the Mauthausen concentration camp, carrying out a series of experiments on the camp's Jewish inmates.
Revised:  Hein worked as a doctor in the Mauthausen concentration camp, carrying out a series of experiments on the camp's Jewish inmates.
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Original:  According to the Times, such experiments included operating on a patient without anaesthetic to see how much pain a human being could endure, and injecting petrol into the bloodstream, then timing how long it took for the victim to die.
Revised:  His experiments reportedly included operating on a patient without anaesthetic to see how much pain a human being could endure, and injecting petrol into the bloodstream, then timing how long it took for the victim to die.
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Original:  Nazi hunters, including researchers from the Simon Wiesenthal Centre , have been looking for him ever since  
Revised:  Nazi hunters, including researchers from the Simon Wiesenthal Center , have been looking for him ever since 
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Original: Spanish police believe that they are close to capturing Aribert Hein, the 91-year-old known as "Dr. Death".
Revised: Spanish police believe they are close to capturing Aribert Hein, the 91-year-old known as "Dr. Death".
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Original:  The Times reports that Hein led a normal civilian life after the end of the Second World War, but fled Germany in 1962, when the authorities were about to issue an arrest for his arrest.
Revised:  The Times reports that Hein led a normal civilian life after the end of the Second World War, but fled Germany in 1962, when the authorities were about to issue a warrant for his arrest.
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Original: Spanish police believe they are close to capturing Aribert Hein , the 91-year-old known as "Dr. Death".
Revised: Spanish police believe they are close to capturing Aribert Heim , the 91-year-old known as "Dr. Death".
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Original:  Dr. Hein , described by The Times as "the most wanted Nazi still believed to be alive", is thought to be living in the town of Palafrugell in the Costa Brava area of Spain.
Revised:  Dr. Heim , described by The Times as "the most wanted Nazi still believed to be alive", is thought to be living in the town of Palafrugell in the Costa Brava area of Spain.
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Original:  Hein worked as a doctor in a number of Nazi Germany concentration camps (Mauthausen, Sachsenhausen and Buchenwald) carrying out a series of experiments on the camp's Jewish inmates.
Revised:  Heim worked as a doctor in a number of Nazi Germany concentration camps (Mauthausen, Sachsenhausen and Buchenwald) carrying out a series of experiments on the camp's Jewish inmates.
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Original:  The Times reports that Hein led a normal civilian life after the end of the Second World War, but fled Germany in 1962, when the authorities were about to issue a warrant for his arrest.
Revised:  The Times reports that Heim led a normal civilian life after the end of the Second World War, but fled Germany in 1962, when the authorities were about to issue a warrant for his arrest.
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Original: The Los Angeles City Council vote to sue a police officer accused of creating a story about being shot by someone at El Camino High School, cause a costly search by police.
Revised: The Los Angeles City Council voted to sue a police officer accused of creating a story about being shot by someone at El Camino High School, cause a costly search by police.
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Original:  The council voted to ask Stenroos to pay the city and state for the cost of the search.
Revised:  The council voted to ask Stenroos to pay the city for the cost of the search.
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Original:  The Los Angeles City Council voted unanimously to sue a police officer accused of creating a story about being shot by someone at El Camino High School, cause a costly search by police.
Revised: Los Angeles City Hall, where the council meets. The Los Angeles City Council voted unanimously to sue a police officer accused of creating a story about being shot by someone at El Camino High School, cause a costly search by police.
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Original:  The officer, Jeffrey Stenroos, had worked for the Los Angeles Unified School District police for eight years and he caused thousands of student to remain in lock down for hours.
Revised:  The officer, Jeffrey Stenroos, had worked for the Los Angeles Unified School District police for eight years and he caused thousands of student to remain on lockdown for hours.
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Original:  Thursday, the Los Angeles Police chief announced Stenroos' claim was false and he was later arrested and released in $20,000 (€14,600) .
Revised:  Thursday, the Los Angeles Police chief announced Stenroos' claim was false and he was later arrested and released on $20,000 (€14,600) .
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Original:  Thursday, the Los Angeles Police chief announced Stenroos' claim was false and he was later arrested and released in $20,000 (€14,600) .
Revised:  Thursday, the Los Angeles Police chief announced Stenroos' claim was false and he was later arrested and released in $20,000 (€14,600) 
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Original:  According to an officer, he was mishandling a firearm.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Filing a false police report is a felony in California
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Original:  The Los Angeles City Council voted unanimously to sue a police officer accused of creating a story about being shot by someone at El Camino High School, cause a costly search  by police.
Revised:  The Los Angeles City Council voted unanimously to sue a police officer accused of creating a story about being shot by someone at El Camino High School, causing a costly search by police.
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Original:  The officer, Jeffrey Stenroos,  had worked for the Los Angeles Unified School District police for eight years and he caused thousands of student to remain on lockdown for hours.
Revised:  The officer, Jeffrey Stenroos, who had worked for the Los Angeles Unified School District police for eight years and he caused thousands of student to remain on lockdown for hours.
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Original:  The officer, Jeffrey Stenroos,  had worked for the Los Angeles Unified School District police for eight years and he caused thousands of student to remain on lockdown for hours.
Revised:  The officer, Jeffrey Stenroos, had worked for the Los Angeles Unified School District police for eight years , caused thousands of student to remain on lockdown for hours.
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Original: The officer, Jeffrey Stenroos, who had worked for the Los Angeles Unified School District police for eight years, caused thousands of student to remain on lockdown for hours.
Revised: The officer, Jeffrey Stenroos, who had worked for the Los Angeles Unified School District police for eight years, caused thousands of students to remain on lockdown for hours.
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Original:  The news comes hours after six journalists who reported on the protests were released from custody.
Revised:  The news came hours after six journalists who reported on the protests were released from custody.
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Original:  Hosni Mubarak today announced a new cabinet, which does not include several figures who protesters largely do not approve of.
Revised:  Hosni Mubarak yesterday announced a new cabinet, which does not include several figures who protesters largely do not approve of.
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Original: __NOTOC__ soldiers monitor protests over the weekend.
Revised:  soldiers monitor protests over the weekend.
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Original:  Army will 'not use force'%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a statement broadcast on state media in Egypt, the army said: "To the great people of Egypt, your armed forces, acknowledging the legitimate rights of the people ... have not and will not use force against the Egyptian people."
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a statement broadcast on state media in Egypt, the army said: "To the great people of Egypt, your armed forces, acknowledging the legitimate rights of the people ... have not and will not use force against the Egyptian people."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% Mubarak has been bluffing us for 30 years."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In Tahrir Square today, protesters played music as strings of barbed wire and army tanks stood nearby.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% has been bluffing us for 30 years."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In Tahrir Square today, protesters played music as strings of barbed wire and army tanks stood nearby.
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Revised:  NEUTRALIZER WAZZAWAZZAWAZ REVENGES!
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Original: Journalists released Earlier today, six journalists from the independent news network Al Jazeera were released from custody after being detained by police.
Revised: Journalists released Earlier today, six journalists from the independent news network Al-Jazeera were released from custody after being detained by police.
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Original:  Al Jazeera said they were "appalled" by the government's decision to close its Egyptian offices, which they described as the "latest attack by the Egyptian regime to strike at its freedom to report independently on the unprecedented events in Egypt."
Revised:  Al-Jazeera said they were "appalled" by the government's decision to close its Egyptian offices, which they described as the "latest attack by the Egyptian regime to strike at its freedom to report independently on the unprecedented events in Egypt."
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Original:  In a statement, the news agency added: " Al Jazeera sees this as an act designed to stifle and repress the freedom of reporting by the network and its journalists.
Revised:  In a statement, the news agency added: " Al-Jazeera sees this as an act designed to stifle and repress the freedom of reporting by the network and its journalists.
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Original: Different from its three sister museums which are aged over 100 years and mainly interested in fine-arts, the new museum focuses on history, and have an ambition to display hwo Japanese culture had been developped from the prehistoric period till the midst of 19th century with its some 920 items collection including three national treasures.
Revised: Different from its three sister museums which are aged over 100 years and mainly interested in fine-arts, the new museum focuses on history, and have an ambition to display how Japanese culture had been developped from the prehistoric period till the midst of 19th century with its some 920 items collection including three national treasures.
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Original: Different from its three sister museums which are aged over 100 years and mainly interested in fine-arts, the new museum focuses on history , and have an ambition to display how Japanese culture had been developped from the prehistoric period till the midst of 19th century with its  some 920 items collection including three national treasures.
Revised: Different from its three sister museums which are over 100 years and mainly interested in fine-arts, the new museum focuses on history , and have an ambition to display how Japanese culture had been developped from the prehistoric period till the midst of 19th century with its some 920 items collection including three national treasures.
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Original: Different from its three sister museums which are aged over 100 years and mainly interested in fine-arts, the new museum focuses on history , and have an ambition to display how Japanese culture had been developped from the prehistoric period till the midst of 19th century with its  some 920 items collection including three national treasures.
Revised: Different from its three sister museums which are aged over 100 years old and interested mainly in fine-arts, the new museum focuses on history , and have an ambition to display how Japanese culture had been developped from the prehistoric period till the midst of 19th century with its some 920 items collection including three national treasures.
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