wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Other structures View of Acropolis from Sanctuary of Asclepion Other notable structures still in existence on the upper part of the Acropolis include: The Royal palaces The Heroön – a shrine where the kings of Pergamon, particularly Attalus I and Eumenes II, were worshipped.
Revised:  Other structures Other notable structures still in existence on the upper part of the Acropolis include: The Royal palaces The Heroön – a shrine where the kings of Pergamon, particularly Attalus I and Eumenes II, were worshipped.
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Original: Bergama (Pergamum)-Akhisar (Thyatira) accessed September 24, 2007 The Upper Agora The Roman baths complex Diodorus Pasporos heroon Arsenals Lower Acropolis  Gymnasium Gymnasium area near Upper Terrace Sanctuary of Asclepius The Roman theatre upright 1.5|Temple of Telesphorus 250px| Reconstruction of ancient Pergamon. south of the Acropolis at (39° 7′ 9″ N, 27° 9′ 56″ E), down in the valley, there was the Sanctuary of Asclepius (also known as the Asclepium), the god of healing.
Revised: Bergama (Pergamum)-Akhisar (Thyatira) accessed September 24, 2007 The Upper Agora The Roman baths complex Diodorus Pasporos heroon Arsenals Lower Acropolis View of Acropolis from the Sanctuary of Asclepion Gymnasium Gymnasium area near Upper Terrace Sanctuary of Asclepius The Roman theatre upright 1.5|Temple of Telesphorus 250px| Reconstruction of ancient Pergamon. south of the Acropolis at (39° 7′ 9″ N, 27° 9′ 56″ E), down in the valley, there was the Sanctuary of Asclepius (also known as the Asclepium), the god of healing.
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Original: Bergama (Pergamum)-Akhisar (Thyatira) accessed September 24, 2007 The Upper Agora The Roman baths complex Diodorus Pasporos heroon Arsenals Lower Acropolis  Gymnasium Gymnasium area near Upper Terrace Sanctuary of Asclepius The Roman theatre upright 1.5|Temple of Telesphorus 250px| Reconstruction of ancient Pergamon. south of the Acropolis at (39° 7′ 9″ N, 27° 9′ 56″ E), down in the valley, there was the Sanctuary of Asclepius (also known as the Asclepium), the god of healing.
Revised: Bergama (Pergamum)-Akhisar (Thyatira) accessed September 24, 2007 The Upper Agora The Roman baths complex Diodorus Pasporos heroon Arsenals Lower Acropolis Gymnasium Gymnasium area near Upper Terrace Sanctuary of Asclepius The Roman theatre upright 1.5|Temple of Telesphorus Reconstruction of ancient Pergamon. south of the Acropolis at (39° 7′ 9″ N, 27° 9′ 56″ E), down in the valley, there was the Sanctuary of Asclepius (also known as the Asclepium), the god of healing.
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Original: Direct drug administration The first, well documented use of direct MDA took place in a rubber plantation in Liberia in 1931.
Revised: Mass drug administration The first, well documented use of direct MDA took place in a rubber plantation in Liberia in 1931.
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Original: Mass drug administration The first, well documented use of direct MDA took place in a rubber plantation in Liberia in 1931.
Revised: Direct drug administration The first, well documented use of direct MDA took place in a rubber plantation in Liberia in 1931.
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Original:  In addition, in 60 villages, MDA with sulfalene / pyrimethamine was given at 10 week intervals for two years.
Revised:  In addition, in 60 villages, MDA with sulfalene / pyrimethamine was given at 10-week intervals for two years.
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Original:  In indirect MDA, the antimalarial drug is added to food stuff, usually salt.
Revised:  In indirect MDA, the antimalarial drug is added to food , such as the fortification of salt.
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Original:  43 (5), 358–370 Starting in September 1991, three malaria-control activities were employed – permethrin-impregnated bednets , larvivorous fish and the administration of three antimalarials.
Revised:  43 (5), 358–370 Starting in September 1991, three malaria-control activities were employed – permethrin-impregnated bed nets , larvivorous fish and the administration of three antimalarials.
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Original:  Vararuchi and panchami after their marriage set out on a long journey .
Revised:  Given that Perumthachan was a Vishwakarma his parents must also have been Vishwakarma Brahmins (Carpenters called as Vishwa Brahmins). After their marriage, they set out on a long journey .
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Original: Perumthachan (പെരുന്തച്ചന്‍), also spelled as "Perunthchan" (പെരു - Peru/big, തച്ചന്‍ - thachan/craftsman), meaning the master carpenter or  the master craftsman of vishwakarma community , is an honorific title that is used to refer to an ancient legendary carpenter (ആശാരി Achari/Acharya), architect, woodcarver and sculptor (stone/wood) from Kerala, India.
Revised: Perumthachan (പെരുന്തച്ചന്‍), also spelled as "Perunthchan" (പെരു - Peru/big, തച്ചന്‍ - thachan/craftsman), meaning the master carpenter or '' the master craftsman of vishwakarma community , is an honorific title that is used to refer to an ancient legendary carpenter (ആശാരി Achari/Acharya), architect, woodcarver and sculptor (stone/wood) from Kerala, India.
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Original: Perumthachan (പെരുന്തച്ചന്‍), also spelled as "Perunthchan" (പെരു - Peru/big, തച്ചന്‍ - thachan/craftsman), meaning the master carpenter or ''the master craftsman ', is an honorific title that is used to refer to an ancient legendary carpenter (ആശാരി Achari/Acharya ), architect, woodcarver and sculptor (stone/wood) from Kerala, India.
Revised: Perumthachan (പെരുന്തച്ചന്‍), also spelled as "Perunthchan" (പെരു - Peru/big, തച്ചന്‍ - thachan/craftsman), meaning the master carpenter or ''the master craftsman ', is an honorific title that is used to refer to an ancient legendary carpenter (ആശാരി Ashari ), architect, woodcarver and sculptor (stone/wood) from Kerala, India.
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Original: Perumthachan (പെരുന്തച്ചന്‍), also spelled as "Perunthchan" (പെരു - Peru/big, തച്ചന്‍ - thachan/craftsman), meaning the master carpenter or ''the master craftsman ', is an honorific title that is used to refer to an ancient legendary carpenter (ആശാരി Ashari ), architect, woodcarver and sculptor (stone/wood) from Kerala, India.
Revised: Perumthachan (പെരുന്തച്ചന്‍), also spelled as "Perunthchan" (പെരു - Peru/big, തച്ചന്‍ - thachan/craftsman), meaning the master carpenter or ''the master craftsman ', is an honorific title that is used to refer to an ancient legendary carpenter (ആശാരി Aashari ), architect, woodcarver and sculptor (stone/wood) from Kerala, India.
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Original:  He was best known for co-founding Microsoft  with childhood friend Bill Gates in 1975, which helped spark the microcomputer revolution of the 1970s and 1980s.
Revised:  He was best known for co-founding Microsoft Corporation with childhood friend Bill Gates in 1975, which helped spark the microcomputer revolution of the 1970s and 1980s.
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Original:    In the early stages of the field battle the Mughal commander received several severe wounds and victory seemed assured to the Bengali army.
Revised:  The battle had begun In the early stages of the field battle the Mughal commander received several severe wounds and victory seemed assured to the Bengali army.
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Original:  But  later in the day  the fall of Daud's general Gujar Khan caused the battle to change sides and brought about the total defeat of  Daud who fled from the field along with 30,000 of his troops.
Revised:  But later in the day . Eventually the fall of Daud's general Gujar Khan caused the battle to change sides and brought about the total defeat of Daud who fled from the field along with 30,000 of his troops.
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Original:  But  later in the day  the fall of Daud's general Gujar Khan caused the battle to change sides and brought about the total defeat of  Daud who fled from the field along with 30,000 of his troops.
Revised:  But later in the day the fall of Daud's general Gujar Khan caused the tides to change sides and brought about the total defeat of Daud who fled from the field along with 30,000 of his troops.
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Original:  But  later in the day  the fall of Daud's general Gujar Khan caused the battle to change sides and brought about the total defeat of  Daud who fled from the field along with 30,000 of his troops.
Revised:  But later in the day the fall of Daud's general Gujar Khan caused the battle to change sides and brought about the total defeat of Nawab Daud who fled from the field along with 30,000 of his troops.
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Original: The Shape of the Land Mountains and lakes, rolling hills, flat plains, and rocky outcrops are features of a landscape that is always changing.
Revised:  Mountains and lakes, rolling hills, flat plains, and rocky outcrops are features of a landscape that is always changing.
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Original: The Shape of the Land Mountains and lakes, rolling hills, flat plains, and rocky outcrops are features of a landscape that is always changing.
Revised: The Shape of the Land 
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Original: Figure of the Earth is a term of art in geodesy that refers to the size and shape used to model Earth.
Revised: Figure of the h is a term of art in geodesy that refers to the size and shape used to model Earth.
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Original:  Better approximations can be had by modeling the entire surface as an oblate spheroid, using spherical harmonics to approximate the geoid , or modeling a region with a best-fit reference ellipsoid .
Revised:  Better approximations can be had by modeling the entire surface as an oblate spheroid, using spherical harmonics to approximate the flatness , or modeling a region with a best-fit reference ellipsoid .
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Original:  For surveys of small areas, a planar (flat) model of Earth's surface suffices because the local topography overwhelms the curvature.
Revised:  For surveys of all areas, a planar (flat) model of Earth's surface suffices because the local topography overwhelms the curvature.
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Original:  Plane-table surveys are made for relatively small areas without considering the size and shape of the entire Earth.
Revised:  Plane-table surveys are made for all areas while considering the size and shape of the entire Earth.
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Original:  The sphere is an approximation of the figure of the Earth that is satisfactory for many purposes.
Revised:  The sphere is an f do cddssatisfactory for many purposes.
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Original:  The  estimated global biomass of lanternfish is 550–660 million metric tonnes, about six times the annual tonnage captured worldwide by fisheries  .
Revised:  The estimated global biomass of lanternfish was 550–660 million metric tonnes, about six times the annual tonnage captured worldwide by fisheries .
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Original: The deep scattering layer, sometimes referred to as the sound scattering layer, is a name given to a layer in the ocean consisting of a variety of marine animals.
Revised: The deep scattering layer, sometimes referred to as the sound scattering layer, is a layer in the ocean consisting of a variety of marine animals.
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Original:  The previous estimated global biomass of lanternfish was 550–660 million metric tonnes, about six times the annual tonnage captured worldwide by fisheries.
Revised:  The previous estimated global biomass of lanternfish was 550–660 million tonnes, about six times the annual tonnage captured worldwide by fisheries.
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Original: Some of Koto's companies include PT Basko Minang Plaza (shopping centre), PT Cerya Riau Mandiri Printing (printing), PT Cerya Zico Utama (property), PT Bastara Jaya Muda (coal mining), PT Riau Agro Mandiri (livestock), PT Riau Agro Mandiri Perkasa (seedling, meat canning), PT Indonesian Mesh Network (cable TV and internet), and PT Best Western Hotel ( hotelBY DARA ).
Revised: Some of Koto's companies include PT Basko Minang Plaza (shopping centre), PT Cerya Riau Mandiri Printing (printing), PT Cerya Zico Utama (property), PT Bastara Jaya Muda (coal mining), PT Riau Agro Mandiri (livestock), PT Riau Agro Mandiri Perkasa (seedling, meat canning), PT Indonesian Mesh Network (cable TV and internet), and PT Best Western Hotel ( hotel ).
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Original:  E. Tucker, «Nadir Shah’s Quest for Legitimacy in Post-Safavid Iran», p. 6 The Kashmirian historian Lateef described him as follows: "Nader Shah, the horror of Asia, the pride and savior of his country, the restorer of her freedom and conqueror of India, who, having a simple origin, rose to such greatness that monarchs rarely have from birth".
Revised:  The Kashmirian historian Lateef described him as follows: "Nader Shah, the horror of Asia, the pride and savior of his country, the restorer of her freedom and conqueror of India, who, having a simple origin, rose to such greatness that monarchs rarely have from birth".
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Original: Early life Nader Shah was born in the fortress of Dastgerd into the Qereqlu clan of the Afshars, a semi-nomadic Turkic Qizilbash pastoralist tribe settled in the northern valleys of Khorasan, a province in the northeast of the Iranian Empire.
Revised: Early life Nader Shah was born in the fortress of Dastgerd into the Afshars, a semi-nomadic Turkic Qizilbash pastoralist tribe settled in the northern valleys of Khorasan, a province in the northeast of the Iranian Empire.
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Original: Early life Nader Shah was born in the fortress of Dastgerd into the Qereqlu clan of the Afshars, a semi-nomadic Turkic Qizilbash pastoralist tribe settled in the northern valleys of Khorasan, a province in the northeast of the Iranian Empire.
Revised: Early life Nader Shah was born in the fortress of Dastgerd into the Qereqlu clan of the Afshars, a semi-nomadic Qizilbash pastoralist tribe settled in the northern valleys of Khorasan, a province in the northeast of the Iranian Empire.
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Original:  Nader Shah, from Tribal Warrior to Conquering Tyrant "Nader commanded the most powerful military force in Asia, if not the world" as evidenced in his numerous campaigns throughout the Middle East, the Caucasus, Central and South Asia, such as the battles of Herat, Mihmandust, Murche-Khort, Kirkuk, Yeghevard, Khyber Pass, Karnal and Kars, some historians have described him as the Napoleon of Persia , the Sword of Persia ,Axworthy, p. xvii or the Second Alexander.
Revised:  Nader Shah, from Tribal Warrior to Conquering Tyrant "Nader commanded the most powerful military force in Asia, if not the world" as evidenced in his numerous campaigns throughout the Middle East, the Caucasus, Central and South Asia, such as the battles of Herat, Mihmandust, Murche-Khort, Kirkuk, Yeghevard, Khyber Pass, Karnal and Kars, some historians have described him as the Napoleon of Persia , the Sword of Azerbaijan ,Axworthy, p. xvii or the Second Alexander.
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Original:  He was no doubt one of the greatest Persian generals ever.
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Original:  FFQs are a common dietary assessment tool used in large epidemiologic studies of diet and health.
Revised:  FFQs are a common dietary assessment tool used in large epidemiologic studies of nutrition and health.
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Original: Arewa is a small pre-colonial animist dominated state of the Dallol Maouri valley of Niger, known for the indigenous "Maouri" / "Mawri " Hausa culture.
Revised: Arewa is a small pre-colonial animist dominated state of the Dallol Maouri valley of Niger, known for the indigenous Maouri / "Mawri " Hausa culture.
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Original: Arewa is a small pre-colonial animist dominated state of the Dallol Maouri valley of Niger, known for the indigenous "Maouri" / "Mawri " Hausa culture.
Revised: Arewa is a small pre-colonial animist dominated state of the Dallol Maouri valley of Niger, known for the indigenous "Maouri" / Mawri Hausa culture.
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Original: Contemporary rule Arewa's traditional leadership contiunes a largely ceremonial reign in the 21st century, centered just north of the town of Dogondoutchi.
Revised: Contemporary rule Arewa's traditional leadership continues a largely ceremonial reign in the 21st century, centered just north of the town of Dogondoutchi.
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Original: Bloodless surgery is a phrase that was popularized at the beginning of the 20th century by the practice of an internationally famous orthopedic surgeon, Adolf Lorenz, who was known as "the bloodless surgeon of Vienna".
Revised: Bloodless surgery is a non-invasive surgical method developed by orthopedic surgeon, Adolf Lorenz, who was known as "the bloodless surgeon of Vienna".
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Original: The New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 This expression reflected Lorenz's methods for treating patients with noninvasive techniques.
Revised: The New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 
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Original:  17(1): 3–7. Contemporary usage of the term bloodless surgery refers to both invasive and noninvasive medical techniques and protocols , and the phrase itself is somewhat confusing .
Revised:  17(1): 3–7. Contemporary usage of the term bloodless surgery refers to both invasive and noninvasive medical techniques and protocols .
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Original:  The expression does not mean " surgery that makes no use of blood or blood transfusion " . Rather, it refers to surgery performed without transfusion of allogeneic blood.
Revised:  The expression does not mean surgery that makes no use of blood or blood transfusion " . Rather, it refers to surgery performed without transfusion of allogeneic blood.
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Original:  The expression does not mean " surgery that makes no use of blood or blood transfusion " . Rather, it refers to surgery performed without transfusion of allogeneic blood.
Revised:  The expression does not mean " surgery that makes no use of blood or blood transfusion . Rather, it refers to surgery performed without transfusion of allogeneic blood.
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Original:  JAMA. 1977;232:1256-1258. of more than 500 cardiac surgeries in this population, documenting that cardiac surgery could be safely performed without blood transfusion.
Revised:  JAMA. 1977;232:1256-1258. 
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Original:  Ronald Lapin (1941–1995) was an American surgeon, who became interested in bloodless surgery in the mid-1970s.
Revised:  Ron Lapin (1941–1995) was an American surgeon, who became interested in bloodless surgery in the mid-1970s.
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Original:  17(1): 3–7. Contemporary usage of the term bloodless surgery refers to both invasive and noninvasive medical techniques and protocols.
Revised:  17(1): 3–7. Contemporary usage of the term refers to both invasive and noninvasive medical techniques and protocols.
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Original:   No man's blood by Gene Church (1983) First Do No Harm Documentary URL Cleveland Clinic - Wall Street Journal URL
Revised:  Sources No man's blood by Gene Church (1983) First Do No Harm Documentary URL Cleveland Clinic - Wall Street Journal URL
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Original: The  New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
Revised: The The New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
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Original: The  New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
Revised: The New York Times October 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
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Original: The  New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
Revised: The New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times September 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
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Original: The  New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
Revised: The New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1The New York Times December 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
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Original: The  New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3New York Times Nov 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
Revised: The New York Times Oct 26, 1902, pg. 7The New York Times Sep 10, 1906, pg. 1New York Times Dec 25, 1902, pg. 3The New York Times November 22, 1926, pg. 3 His medical practice was a consequence of his severe allergy to carbolic acid routinely used in operating rooms of the era.
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Original: Farmer S, Webb D, Your Body Your Choice The layman's complete guide to bloodless medicine and surgery , 2000, pgs.
Revised: Farmer S, Webb D, Your Body Your Choice : The Layman's Complete Guide to Bloodless Medicine and Surgery , 2000, pgs.
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Original: Farmer S, Webb D, Your Body Your Choice The layman's complete guide to bloodless medicine and surgery , 2000, pgs. 11, 14, 75.Dailey, John F, Dailey's Notes on Blood Fourth Edition, 2002 pg. 198. Champions of bloodless surgery do, however, transfuse products made from allogeneic blood  and they also make use of pre-donated blood for autologous transfusion  .
Revised: Farmer S, Webb D, Your Body Your Choice : The Layman's Complete Guide to Bloodless Medicine and Surgery , 2000, pgs. 11, 14, 75.Dailey, John F, Dailey's Notes on Blood Fourth Edition, 2002 pg. 198. Champions of bloodless surgery do, however, transfuse products made from allogeneic blood and they also make use of pre-donated blood for autologous transfusion .
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Original: Farmer S, Webb D, Your Body Your Choice The layman's complete guide to bloodless medicine and surgery , 2000, pgs. 144–5.
Revised: Farmer S, Webb D, Your Body Your Choice : The Layman's Complete Guide to Bloodless Medicine and Surgery , 2000, pgs. 144–5.
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Original:  Report of 542 operations without blood transfusion  . JAMA. 1977;
Revised:  Report of 542 operations without blood transfusion " . JAMA. 1977;
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Original:  Ford (  1955 – ) was the first surgeon to perform a bloodless bone marrow transplant.
Revised:  Ford ( born 1955 – ) was the first surgeon to perform a bloodless bone marrow transplant.
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Original:  Ford (  1955 – ) was the first surgeon to perform a bloodless bone marrow transplant.
Revised:  Ford ( 1955 ) was the first surgeon to perform a bloodless bone marrow transplant.
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