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Original:  The All Blacks preformed  their much talked of Kapa O Pango haka before the match, in an attempt to fire them up, but it was Australia who opened up the scoring in the match, when Chris Lathem offloaded to Mat Rogers who sprinted down the left sidelined and passed to Lote Tuqiri who scored the try.
Revised:  The All Blacks preformed their much talked of Kapa O Pango haka before the match, but it was Australia who opened up the scoring in the match, when Chris Lathem offloaded to Mat Rogers who sprinted down the left sidelined and passed to Lote Tuqiri who scored the try.
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Original:  Down one man , Australia was able to hold out the All Blacks , with Tuqiri and Lathem puhing them over the sideline.
Revised:  Down one man Australia were not able to hold out the All Blacks , with Tuqiri and Lathem puhing them over the sideline.
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Original:   Carter, after missing two previous penalty goals, successfully converted the try.
Revised:  Daniel Carter, after missing two previous penalty goals, successfully converted the try.
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Original:  Five minutes from half-time, Mealamu barged over to score his second try of the match with Carter  converting.
Revised:  Five minutes from half-time, Mealamu barged over to score his second try of the match with Carter again converting.
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Original:  A possible New Zealand try is sent up to the television-match-official , as the ball appears to be grounded by Stephen Larkem's legs, however, All Blacks captain Richie McCaw also grounds it with his arm.
Revised:  The television-match-official , as the ball appears to be grounded by Stephen Larkem's legs, however, All Blacks captain Richie McCaw also grounds it with his arm.
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Original:  The try was awarded, and Carter converted to take New Zealand's lead to 24 to seven with 30 minutes left of play remaining .
Revised:  The try was awarded, and Carter converted to take New Zealand's lead to 24 to seven with 30 minutes left on the clock .
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Original:  Scott Fava came on for Australia in the 50th minute, and got over for a try within minutes of coming on . Mortlock missed the conversion, and the score was now at 24 to 12 to the All Blacks.
Revised:  Scott Fava came on for Australia in the 50th minute, and soon scored a try for Australia . Mortlock missed the conversion, and the score was now at 24 to 12 to the All Blacks.
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Original:  Scott Fava came on for Australia in the 50th minute, and got over for a try within minutes of coming on . Mortlock missed the conversion, and the score was now at 24 to 12 to the All Blacks.
Revised:  Scott Fava came on for Australia in the 50th minute, and got over for a try within minutes of coming on . Mortlock missed the conversion, and the score was at 24 to 12 to the All Blacks.
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Original:  Scott Fava came on for Australia in the 50th minute, and got over for a try within minutes of coming on . Mortlock missed the conversion, and the score was now at 24 to 12 to the All Blacks.
Revised:  Scott Fava came on for Australia in the 50th minute, and got over for a try within minutes of coming on . Mortlock missed the conversion, and the score was now at 24 to 12 in favour of the All Blacks.
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Original:  Australia almost scored another try, but the ambiguity of it saw it disallowed.
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Original: The U.S. Army's surgeon general, Lt. Gen. Kevin C. Kiley, told reporters Friday that soldiers exhibiting personality disorders would not be automatically discharged from the army because many can continue to perform their duties well.
Revised: The U.S. Army's surgeon general, Lt. Gen. Kevin C. Kiley, told reporters Friday that soldiers exhibiting personality disorders would not be automatically discharged because many can continue to perform their duties well.
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Original:  However, the army did discharge more than 1,000 soldiers last year for personality disorders which is the reason the army gave for discharging Steven D. Green who now stands accused of raping a young Iraqi female and murdering her and her family.
Revised:  However, the army did discharge more than 1,000 soldiers last year for personality disorders . Among them was Steven Dale Green, who now stands accused of raping a young Iraqi female and murdering her and her family.
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Original:  U.S. Defense Department officials announced last month that they have set up a task force to study the mental health of american troops.
Revised:  U.S. Defense Department officials announced last month that they have set up a task force to study the mental health of American troops.
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Original:  On May 4, prior to the task force being set up , U.S. Senator Barbara Boxer said the military faces a "mental health crisis" and criticized the penatgon for inaction.
Revised:  On May 4, prior to the creation of the task force , U.S. Senator Barbara Boxer said the military faces a "mental health crisis" and criticized the penatgon for inaction.
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Original:  On May 4, prior to the task force being set up , U.S. Senator Barbara Boxer said the military faces a "mental health crisis" and criticized the penatgon for inaction.
Revised:  On May 4, prior to the task force being set up , U.S. Senator Barbara Boxer said the military faces a "mental health crisis" and criticized the Pentagon for inaction.
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Original: The government requested approval to use "filter teams" to inspect any confidential papers.
Revised: The government requested approval to use "filter teams" to inspect confidential papers.
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Original: Lawyers asked a federal court Friday to allow the government to inspect written materials that it seized from inmates at Guantanamo Bay last month that  may contain privileged lawyer-client communication.
Revised: Lawyers asked a federal court Friday to allow the government to inspect written materials that it seized from inmates at Guantanamo Bay last month that it says may contain privileged lawyer-client communication.
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Original:  Barbara Olshansky, Deputy Legal Director at CCR, described the move as a tactic to impede detainees' access to legal representation "and to make these lawyers fight for yet another thing    .
Revised:  Barbara Olshansky, Deputy Legal Director at CCR, described the move as a tactic to impede detainees' access to legal representation "and to make these lawyers fight for yet another thing ." .
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Original:  He added, however, that at least one detainee claimed that camp officials had confiscated his written materials and told him that they were looking into "whether lawyers had actively encouraged detainees to commit suicide.  
Revised:  He added, however, that at least one detainee claimed that camp officials had confiscated his written materials and told him that they were looking into "whether lawyers had actively encouraged detainees to commit suicide. " 
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Original:  The government requested approval to use "filter teams" to inspect confidential papers.
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Original: In documents they filed with the U.S. District Court for the District of Columbia, government lawyers argued that three inmates who committed suicide last month by hanging themselves coordinated their actions by misusing attorney-client confidentiality to communicate with each other.
Revised: In documents they filed with the U.S. District Court for the District of Columbia, government lawyers argued that three inmates who committed suicide last month by hanging themselves coordinated their actions by using attorney-client confidentiality to communicate with each other.
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Original:  Among papers marked "Attorney Client Privilege" were instructions on how to tie knots and a classified memo on camp activities and inmate locations , government officials said . Military officials seized more than 1,100 pounds of documents from inmates after the suicides on June 10.
Revised:  Government officials said that among papers marked "Attorney Client Privilege" were instructions on how to tie knots and a classified memo on camp activities and inmate locations , government officials said . Military officials seized more than 1,100 pounds of documents from inmates after the suicides on June 10.
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Original:  Among papers marked "Attorney Client Privilege" were instructions on how to tie knots and a classified memo on camp activities and inmate locations , government officials said . Military officials seized more than 1,100 pounds of documents from inmates after the suicides on June 10.
Revised:  Among papers marked "Attorney Client Privilege" were instructions on how to tie knots and a classified memo on camp activities and inmate locations . Military officials seized more than 1,100 pounds of documents from inmates after the suicides on June 10.
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Original:  They have since stopped allowing defense lawyers give paper to inmates.
Revised:  They have since stopped defense lawyers from sending any documents to inmates.
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Original:  In an affidavit that lawyers  filed with the court, Rear Admiral Harry B. Harris Jr., the naval commander of the camp, described evidence of a "larger plan or pact for more suicides" among detainees.
Revised:  In an affidavit that lawyers for the government filed with the court, Rear Admiral Harry B. Harris Jr., the naval commander of the camp, described evidence of a "larger plan or pact for more suicides" among detainees.
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Original:  Last month after the document seizures, defense attorney Richard Wilson, who represents a Canadian detainee, said in an affidavit that the military had told him that they were conducting no investigation into the role of attornies in the prisoners' deaths.
Revised:  Last month after the document seizures, defense attorney Richard Wilson, who represents a Canadian detainee, said in an affidavit that the military had told him that they were conducting no investigation into the role of attorneys in the prisoners' deaths.
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Original:  As the aerial firefighting aircraft toke off at the end of the refueling maneuver in the water - designated as 'scooping' - its "left wing hit the top of the trees and the aircraft suffered some damage" to its fuselage, said Colonel Anacleto dos Santos, director of the Cabinet of Prevention and Investigation of Accidents with Aircraft (GPIAA), to the Portuguese newspaper Correio da Manhã.
Revised:  As the aerial firefighting aircraft took off at the end of the refueling maneuver in the water - designated as 'scooping' - its "left wing hit the top of the trees and the aircraft suffered some damage" to its fuselage, said Colonel Anacleto dos Santos, director of the Cabinet of Prevention and Investigation of Accidents with Aircraft (GPIAA), to the Portuguese newspaper Correio da Manhã.
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Original:  Questioned on if the accident had been caused by the eventual limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he advanced that recognition of the location is done before the scooping exercises , and that the operation only goes ahead when there are all the conditions to do so .
Revised:  Questioned on if the accident was caused by the eventual limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he advanced that recognition of the location is done before the scooping exercises , and that the operation only goes ahead when there are all the conditions to do so .
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Original:  Questioned on if the accident had been caused by the eventual limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he advanced that recognition of the location is done before the scooping exercises , and that the operation only goes ahead when there are all the conditions to do so .
Revised:  Questioned on if the accident had been caused by the limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he advanced that recognition of the location is done before the scooping exercises , and that the operation only goes ahead when there are all the conditions to do so .
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Original:  Questioned on if the accident had been caused by the eventual limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he advanced that recognition of the location is done before the scooping exercises , and that the operation only goes ahead when there are all the conditions to do so .
Revised:  Questioned on if the accident had been caused by the eventual limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he said that the reconnaissance of the area had been performed before the scooping exercises , and that the operation only goes ahead when there are all the conditions to do so .
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Original:  Questioned on if the accident had been caused by the eventual limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he advanced that recognition of the location is done before the scooping exercises , and that the operation only goes ahead when there are all the conditions to do so .
Revised:  Questioned on if the accident had been caused by the eventual limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he advanced that recognition of the location is done before the scooping exercises began, and an operation officially kicks off when all the conditions to do so .
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Original:  Questioned on if the accident had been caused by the eventual limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he advanced that recognition of the location is done before the scooping exercises , and that the operation only goes ahead when there are all the conditions to do so .
Revised:  Questioned on if the accident had been caused by the eventual limitations of the dam, given the dimensions of the aircraft, he advanced that recognition of the location is done before the scooping exercises , and that the operation only goes ahead when there are all the conditions are met .
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Original: The accident occurred after an refueling operation at the dam of Aguieira, near Santa Comba Dão.
Revised: The accident occurred after a refueling operation at the dam of Aguieira, near Santa Comba Dão.
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Original: While hitting the top of the trees, leafs and some wood entered the left engine, that didn't blow up, but that had to be turned off and the pilot was forced to release fuel for safety reasons.
Revised: While hitting the top of the trees, leaves and some wood entered the left engine, that didn't blow up, but that had to be turned off and the pilot was forced to release fuel for safety reasons.
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Original:  When contacted to the Lusa news agency, National Service of Firefighters and Civil Protection, vice-president Lieutenant-Colonel Joaquim Leitão explained that the repairs will be made by the aircraft company and that all the parts necessary to repair the damages will have to come from Russia, by which the solution for the problem will take "some days".
Revised:  When contacted by the Lusa news agency, National Service of Firefighters and Civil Protection, vice-president Lieutenant-Colonel Joaquim Leitão explained that the repairs will be made by the aircraft company and that all the parts necessary to repair the damages will have to come from Russia, by which the solution for the problem will take "some days".
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Original: The accident occured at the dam of Aguieira during an refueling operation.
Revised: The accident occurred at the dam of Aguieira during an refueling operation.
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Original: The pope will have a mass tomorrow which will close the visit.
Revised: The pope will have a Mass tomorrow which will close the visit.
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Original:  Zapatero said that he would not attend the mass on Sunday   
Revised:  Zapatero said that he would not attend the mass on Sunday . 
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Original:  Zapatero said that he would not attend the mass on Sunday   
Revised:  Zapatero said that he would not attend the mass on Sunday Related 
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Original:  According to the dictionary, correction pronunciation is goo-gle, with other forms including googled and googling.
Revised:  According to the dictionary, the correct pronunciation is goo-gle, with other forms including googled and googling.
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Original: February 13, 2005  The Shi'a United Iraqi Alliance list of candidates has won at least 132 of 275 seats in the Iraq National Assembly, in results announced on Sunday.
Revised: February 13, 2005 URL The Shi'a United Iraqi Alliance list of candidates has won at least 132 of 275 seats in the Iraq National Assembly, in results announced on Sunday.
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Original:  Shi'a list Capturing 48.1\% of the national vote, the UIA is the largest single block in the Assembly.
Revised:  Capturing 48.1\% of the national vote, the UIA is the largest single block in the Assembly.
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Original:  Khurdish list The union of the Khurdish parties garnered 25.4\% of the national vote,  giving Khurds a vital voice in the National Assembly.
Revised:  The union of the Khurdish parties garnered 25.4\% of the national vote, giving Khurds a vital voice in the National Assembly.
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Original:  Iyad Allawhi al-Qayimaal Iraqia, dominated by Iyad Allawi's Iraqi National Accord party, polled at 13.8\%, and secured 38 seats.
Revised:  al-Qayimaal Iraqia, dominated by Iyad Allawi's Iraqi National Accord party, polled at 13.8\%, and secured 38 seats.
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Original:  Iyad Allawhi al-Qayimaal Iraqia, dominated by Iyad Allawi's Iraqi National Accord party, polled at 13.8\%, and secured 38 seats.
Revised:  Iyad Allawhi 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dates, supporting stuff
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Original:  Yet even so large a block must form a unity government, creating alliances with other parties to form a  government.
Revised:  Yet even so large a block must create alliances with other parties to form a government.
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Original:  Yet even so large a block must form a unity government, creating alliances with other parties to form a  government.
Revised:  Yet even so large a block must form a unity government, creating alliances with other parties to form a unity government.
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Original:  The union of the Khurdish parties garnered 25.4\% of the national vote,  71 seats, giving Khurds a vital voice in the National Assembly.
Revised:  The union of the Khurdish parties garnered 25.4\% of the national vote, equivalent to 71 seats, giving Khurds a vital voice in the National Assembly.
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Original:  The National Assembly vote on January 30 also included elections for Governors , and the Khurdistan Assembly.
Revised:  The National Assembly vote on January 30 also included elections for governors , and the Khurdistan Assembly.
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Original:  There are approximately 14.2 million eligible voters , 7,761 candidates in the Transitional National Assembly race.
Revised:  There are approximately 14.2 million eligible voters and 7,761 candidates in the Transitional National Assembly race.
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Original:  WP won the match 15 points to 10, and became WP 's first win over the Bulls in three years, and their first win at Loftus Versfeld since 2001.
Revised:  Western Province won the match 15 points to 10, and became WP 's first win over the Bulls in three years, and their first win at Loftus Versfeld since 2001.
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Original:  WP won the match 15 points to 10, and became WP 's first win over the Bulls in three years, and their first win at Loftus Versfeld since 2001.
Revised:  WP won the match 15 points to 10, and became Western Province 's first win over the Bulls in three years, and their first win at Loftus Versfeld since 2001.
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Original:  The Bulls entered the match as favourites, however, it was the WP that scored the first try of the match, when Egon Seconds made it over the line after 12 minutes of play in the first half.
Revised:  The Bulls entered the match as favourites, however, it was the Western Province that scored the first try of the match, when Egon Seconds made it over the line after 12 minutes of play in the first half.
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Original:  WP 's second try came in the 37th minute of the match, minutes from the half-time break, with Joe Pietersen getting the try.
Revised:  Western Province 's second try came in the 37th minute of the match, minutes from the half-time break, with Joe Pietersen getting the try.
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Original:  WP entered half time with a 15 points to three lead over the Bulls.
Revised:  Western Province entered half time with a 15 points to three lead over the Bulls.
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Original:  The final score was 15 points to 10, with WP scoring two tries, along with a conversion and penalty goal from Naas Olivier, whilst the Blue Bulls scored one try, with a conversion and penalty goal from Morné Steyn
Revised:  The final score was 15 points to 10, with Western Province scoring two tries, along with a conversion and penalty goal from Naas Olivier, whilst the Blue Bulls scored one try, with a conversion and penalty goal from Morné Steyn
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Original: The Gohil family , who once ruled India's Rajpipla principality.
Revised: The Gohil family once ruled India's Rajpipla principality.
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Original: India's 40-year-old Prince Manvendrasinh Singh Gohil, son of the  Maharajah of Rajpipla  , was disowned by his family for coming out as a gay man.
Revised:  40-year-old Prince Manvendrasinh Singh Gohil, son of the Maharajah of Rajpipla , was disowned by his family for coming out as a gay man.
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Original: India's 40-year-old Prince Manvendrasinh Singh Gohil, son of the  Maharajah of Rajpipla  , was disowned by his family for coming out as a gay man.
Revised: India's 40-year-old Manvendrasinh Singh Gohil, son of the Maharajah of Rajpipla , was disowned by his family for coming out as a gay man.
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Original: 40-year-old Manvendrasinh Singh Gohil,  son of the (erstwhile ) Maharajah of Rajpipla (India), was disowned by his  family for coming out as a gay man.
Revised:  Manvendrasinh Singh Gohil, son of the (erstwhile ) Maharajah of Rajpipla (India), was disowned by his family for coming out as a gay man.
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Original: 40-year-old Manvendrasinh Singh Gohil,  son of the (erstwhile ) Maharajah of Rajpipla (India), was disowned by his  family for coming out as a gay man.
Revised: 40-year-old Manvendrasinh Singh Gohil, son of the erstwhile Maharajah of Rajpipla (India), was disowned by his family for coming out as a gay man.
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Original:  Homosexuality has been outlawed in India for 145 years, when the country was under British colonial rule.
Revised:  Homosexuality was effectively criminalized in India in 1861 under British colonial rule.
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Original:  Those convicted of the crime of being homosexual face up to 10 years in prison.
Revised:  The sodomy laws, which remain in force today, mandate penalties of up to 10 years in prison.
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Original:  Gay organisations in India are currently trying to have the section of the Indian Penal Code, which makes homosexuality a punishable offence, nullified.
Revised:  Gay organisations in India are currently trying to have the section of the Indian Penal Code, which makes sodomy a punishable offence, nullified.
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Original:  Gay organisations in India are currently trying to have the section of the Indian Penal Code , which makes sodomy a punishable offence , nullified.
Revised:  Gay organisations in India are currently trying to have the section of the Indian Penal Code that makes homosexuality a punishable offence , nullified.
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