wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The presumed cause, number, time, and length of any nighttime awakenings and activities during these moments Quality of sleep Level of comfortableness of any recalled good or bad dreams Data collection Sleep logs are often hand-drawn on graph paper , as a rule one week per page.
Revised:  The presumed cause, number, time, and length of any nighttime awakenings and activities during these moments Quality of sleep Level of comfortableness of any recalled good or bad dreams Data collection Sleep logs are often chiseled on stone tablets , as a rule one week per page.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Specialized software for creating sleep logs is also available ;
Revised:  Specialized software for creating sleep logs is boring ;
Edit intent: clarity