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Original: Abhisit Vejjajiva Troops are being deployed throughout Thailand as the government of Abhisit Vejjajiva has declared a state of emergency throughout the country against protestors supporting ousted prime minister Thaksin Shinawatra.
Revised: Abhisit Vejjajiva Troops are being deployed throughout Thailand as the government of Abhisit Vejjajiva has declared a state of emergency in reaction to protesters supporting ousted prime minister Thaksin Shinawatra.
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Original:  Armored vehicles and bands of protestors are reported roving the streets of Bangkok and the prime minister has threatened to use force against the protesters.
Revised:  Armoured vehicles and bands of protestors are reported roving the streets of Bangkok and the prime minister has threatened to use force against the protesters.
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Original:  Armored vehicles and bands of protestors are reported roving the streets of Bangkok and the prime minister has threatened to use force against the protesters.
Revised:  Armored vehicles and bands of protesters are reportedly roving the streets of Bangkok and the prime minister has threatened to use force against the protesters.
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Original:  [[Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 ]] The protestors are supporters of the National United Front of Democracy Against Dictatorship , or UDD . They demand the immediate resignation of the prime minister and fresh elections.
Revised:  [[Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 ]] The protesters are supporters of the National United Front of Democracy Against Dictatorship , or UDD . They demand the immediate resignation of the prime minister and fresh elections.
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Original:  [[Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 ]] The protestors are supporters of the National United Front of Democracy Against Dictatorship , or UDD . They demand the immediate resignation of the prime minister and fresh elections.
Revised:  [[Image:Thaksin DOD 20050915.jpg|200px|File photo of Thaksin Shinawatra from 2005 ]] The protestors are supporters of the National United Front of Democracy Against Dictatorship (UDD) . They demand the immediate resignation of the prime minister and fresh elections.
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Original:  A group of protestors at the country's Ministry of the Interior, which Xinhua says numbered in the "hundreds", attacked the prime minister's vehicle but Abhisit was not inside at the time.
Revised:  A group of protesters at the country's Ministry of the Interior, which Xinhua says numbered in the "hundreds", attacked the prime minister's vehicle but Abhisit was not inside at the time.
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Original:  A group of protestors at the country's Ministry of the Interior, which Xinhua says numbered in the "hundreds", attacked the prime minister's vehicle but Abhisit was not inside at the time.
Revised:  A group of protestors at the country's Ministry of the Interior, which Xinhua says numbered in the "hundreds", attacked the prime minister's Mercedes but he was not inside at the time.
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Original:  The state of emergency comes after mass protests and an invasion of the conference building by red-shirted demonstrators shut down the 16-nation ASEAN summit in the resort town of Pattaya yesterday.
Revised:  The state of emergency comes after mass protests and an invasion of the conference building by red-shirted demonstrators forced the abandonment of the sisteen-member ASEAN summit in the resort town of Pattaya yesterday.
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Original:  Mr Thaksin is currently in exile in the United Kingdom after a Thai court sentenced him in absentia to two years of in prison in October 2008, but leads the UDD from abroad.
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Original: The state of emergency comes after mass protests and an invasion of the conference site by UDD red-shirted demonstrators forced the abandonment of the sisteen-member ASEAN summit in the resort town of Pattaya yesterday.
Revised: The state of emergency comes after mass protests and an invasion of the conference site by UDD red-shirted demonstrators forced the abandonment of the sixteen-member ASEAN summit in the resort town of Pattaya yesterday.
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Original:  "You'll see huge pans of ice standing vertical, up to 20 feet high," said Steve Topping, an official with the provincial Water Stewardship Department , "Ice was shoved up on the shore and took out trees with a very devastating effect.
Revised:  "You'll see huge pans of ice standing vertical, up to 20 feet high," said Steve Topping, an official with the provincial Water Stewardship Department . "Ice was shoved up on the shore and took out trees with a very devastating effect.
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Original:  File:Rednorthfloodwaymap.png|Map of the Red River Floodway.
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Original:  ]] The Red River at Winnipeg is almost clear of ice blocks and ice jamming, however their are still dangers from the Red River flood.
Revised:  ]] The Red River at Winnipeg is almost clear of ice blocks and ice jamming, however there are still dangers from the Red River flood.
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Original:  A weather system caused by La Nina is being watched by the United States National Weather Service and its potential effects between April 16-18 for residents along the Red River Valley.
Revised:  A weather system caused by La Niña is being watched by the United States National Weather Service and its potential effects between April 16-18 for residents along the Red River Valley.
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Original:  "Maersk Line Limited is deeply grateful to the Navy, the FBI and so many others for their tireless efforts to secure Richard's freedom.  
Revised:  "Maersk Line Limited is deeply grateful to the Navy, the FBI and so many others for their tireless efforts to secure Richard's freedom. " 
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Original:  "Maersk Line Limited is deeply grateful to the Navy, the FBI and so many others for their tireless efforts to secure Richard's freedom.  
Revised:  "Maersk Line Limited is deeply grateful to the Navy, the FBI and so many others for their tireless efforts to secure Richard's freedom. Related new
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Original: Earlier today, demonstrations and protests were held on , against the Russian invasion of the region in the last few weeks.
Revised: Earlier today, demonstrations and protests were held on , against the intervention of the region in the last few weeks.
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Original:  Whitehall is opposite the British Prime Minister 's residence i
Revised:  Whitehall is opposite the British Prime Minister 's residence in
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Original: Earlier today, demonstrations and protests were held on , against the intervention of the region in the last few weeks.
Revised: Earlier today, demonstrations and protests were held on , against the intervention in the region in the last few weeks.
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Original: Earlier today, demonstrations and protests were held on , against the intervention in the region in the last few weeks.
Revised: Earlier today, demonstrations and protests were held on , against the action in the region in the last few weeks.
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Original:  Lauer insisted that Ritalin helped people: "You're telling me what's worked for people I know or hasn't worked for people I know.
Revised: Cruise may have been referring to a Scientology teaching called "Pain and Sex," in which founder L. Ron Hubbard states that the psychs (psychiatrists and psychologists) have been plaguing us for millions of years over many lifetimes and are "the sole cause of decline in this universe." Hubbard writes, " ... the stocks-in-trade of psychs are PAIN and SEX" (emphasis his), having explained that pain and sex are "not native to a being" but rather are "artificial wavelengths" that both beings and machines can create. Hubbard claims, "These are data which emerged from recent thorough research of the whole track. This is not theory or some strange opinion. It is provable electronic fact." Lauer insisted that Ritalin helped people: "You're telling me what's worked for people I know or hasn't worked for people I know.
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Original:  ] Authors of the affected works have expressed skepticism of Amazon's explanation, accusing Amazon of homophobia and deliberate censorship.
Revised:  An] Authors of the affected works have expressed skepticism of Amazon's explanation, accusing Amazon of homophobia and deliberate censorship.
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Original: Early this afternoon, Amazon began re-ranking some of the affected works but as of 22:30pm had not provided an explanation for the removal.
Revised: Early this afternoon, Amazon began re-ranking some of the affected works and, shortly thereafter, offered an explanation for the removal.
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Original:  Among the books no longer appearing on searches of Amazon's sales are some editions of John Barrowman's and Stephen Fry's autobiographies, some editions of Lady Chatterley's Lover by D.H. Lawrence, and Lesléa Newman's children's book Heather Has Two Mommies, as well as works of erotica such as Emmanuelle Arsan's Emmanuelle.
Revised:  Among the books that vanished on searches of Amazon's sales are some editions of John Barrowman's and Stephen Fry's autobiographies, some editions of Lady Chatterley's Lover by D.H. Lawrence, and Lesléa Newman's children's book Heather Has Two Mommies, as well as works of erotica such as Emmanuelle Arsan's Emmanuelle.
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Original:  Among the books no longer appearing on searches of Amazon's sales are some editions of John Barrowman's and Stephen Fry's autobiographies, some editions of Lady Chatterley's Lover by D.H. Lawrence, and Lesléa Newman's children's book Heather Has Two Mommies, as well as works of erotica such as Emmanuelle Arsan's Emmanuelle.
Revised:  Among the books no longer appearing on searches of Amazon's offerings were some editions of John Barrowman's and Stephen Fry's autobiographies, some editions of Lady Chatterley's Lover by D.H. Lawrence, and Lesléa Newman's children's book Heather Has Two Mommies, as well as works of erotica such as Emmanuelle Arsan's Emmanuelle.
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Original:  Protesting what they see as censorship, many people in the online community have begun organizing petitions and boycotts of Amazon.
Revised:  Protesting what they see as censorship, many people in the online community began organizing petitions and boycotts of Amazon.
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Original:  The online community has also been investigating the de-rankings in order to clarify what works have been dropped.
Revised:  The online community has also been investigating the de-rankings in order to clarify what works were dropped.
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Original: Amazon told Publishers Weekly that a "glitch" was to blame for the de-ranking on Sunday evening , but as of this writing ranks have not been restored .
Revised: Amazon told Publishers Weekly that a "glitch" was to blame for the de-ranking on Sunday evening .
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Original:  Seymour then found through routine searches that the rankings of gay themed works had been dropped but that rankings of books by porn stars like Ron Jeremy and Jenna Jameson had not, in an apparent double standard.
Revised:  Seymour then found through routine searches that the rankings of gay themed works had been dropped but that rankings of books by like and had not, in an apparent double standard.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Patrick Nielsen Hayden at Making Light suggests that the de-ranking started out as well-intentioned but that important information was lost along the way:
Revised:  Meanwhile, at suggests that the de-ranking started out as well-intentioned but that important information was lost along the way:
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Original:  After inquiring about the loss of rank, Seymour received a reply on February 25 saying "the sales rank was not displayed for the following reasons: The ISBN #1416542051 was classified as an Adult product";
Revised:  After inquiring about the loss of rank, Seymour received a reply on February 25 saying "the sales rank was not displayed for the following reasons: The was classified as an Adult product";
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Original:  File photo of an Egyptian Mummy Mask “The mission found dozens of mummies in 53 rock-hewn tombs dating to the Middle Kingdom” said Zahi Hawass, “Four of the mummies date back to the 22nd Dynasty (931 to 725 BC) and are considered some of the most beautiful mummies found,  
Revised:  File photo of an Egyptian Mummy Mask “The mission found dozens of mummies in 53 rock-hewn tombs dating to the Middle Kingdom” said Zahi Hawass, “Four of the mummies date back to the 22nd Dynasty (931 to 725 BC) and are considered some of the most beautiful mummies found, ” 
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Original:  This brings the total number of defibrillator models recalled by Guidant to twelve.
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Original: Collingwood Football Club will play Essendon Football Club in there annual ANZAC Day Australian rules football match at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
Revised: The Essendon Football Club has defeated theCollingwood Football Club in there annual ANZAC Day Australian rules football match at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
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Original: The Essendon Football Club has defeated theCollingwood Football Club in there annual ANZAC Day Australian rules football match at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
Revised: The Essendon Football Club has defeated theCollingwood Football Club in their annual ANZAC Day Australian rules football match at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
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Original: The Essendon Football Club has defeated theCollingwood Football Club in their annual ANZAC Day Australian rules football match at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
Revised: The Essendon Football Club defeat theCollingwood Football Club in their annual ANZAC Day Australian rules football match at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
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Original:  The game is ususally played as a stand alone game on a week day, it is the first game of the round (if played on a Wednesday, Thursday or Friday) or the last (Monday or Tuesday).
Revised:  The game is usually played as a stand alone game on a week day, it is the first game of the round (if played on a Wednesday, Thursday or Friday) or the last (Monday or Tuesday).
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Original:  In 2009 the match will be the first of four played on a Saturday.
Revised:  In 2009 the match was the first of four played on a Saturday.
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Original:  Essendon clawed their way back to tie scroes at half time and to lead by nine points at three quarter time.
Revised:  Essendon clawed their way back to tie scores at half time and to lead by nine points at three quarter time.
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Original:  The final quarter had the crowd well and truley out of their seasts at Collingwood took a fourteen point lead going into the final eight minutes.
Revised:  The final quarter had the crowd well and truly out of their seasts at Collingwood took a fourteen point lead going into the final eight minutes.
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Original:  The final quarter had the crowd well and truley out of their seasts at Collingwood took a fourteen point lead going into the final eight minutes.
Revised:  The final quarter had the crowd well and truley out of their seats at Collingwood took a fourteen point lead going into the final eight minutes.
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Original:  Essendons comeback started with four and a half mintues left in the match with a goal to Lerdy Jetta.
Revised:  Essendons comeback started with four and a half minutes left in the match with a goal to Lerdy Jetta.
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Original:  Essendon tested the Collingwood defence for the next two and a half minutes, but resulte in a rushed behind - one point.
Revised:  Essendon tested the Collingwood defence for the next two and a half minutes, but resulted in a rushed behind - one point.
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Original:  Collingwood lead by fifteen points at quarter time.
Revised:  Collingwood led by fifteen points at quarter time.
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Original:  The final quarter had the crowd well and truly out of their seats at Collingwood took a fourteen point lead going into the final eight minutes.
Revised:  The final quarter had the crowd well and truly out of their seats as Collingwood took a fourteen point lead going into the final eight minutes.
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Original:  Essendons comeback started with four and a half minutes left in the match with a goal to Lerdy Jetta.
Revised:  Essendon's comeback started with four and a half minutes left in the match with a goal to Lerdy Jetta.
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Original:  "To avoid protracted disputes with media organisations and to ensure a minimum standard of protection across digital sports news reporting in Australia, AFL believes that the best means of introducing these restrictions is by way of amendments to the Copyright Act or a mandatory industry code," the AFL said 
Revised:  "To avoid protracted disputes with media organisations and to ensure a minimum standard of protection across digital sports news reporting in Australia, AFL believes that the best means of introducing these restrictions is by way of amendments to the Copyright Act or a mandatory industry code," the AFL 's submission said. 
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Original: The Australian Football League, in it's submission, also argued for legislative amendments, but to the Copyright Act.
Revised: The Australian Football League, in its submission, also argued for legislative amendments, but to the Copyright Act.
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Original:  The Sri Lankan government has stated it believes that there are now only 500 LTTE fighters remaining, intermingled with civilians in the Jaffna Peninsula  
Revised:  The Sri Lankan government has stated it believes that there are now only 500 LTTE fighters remaining, intermingled with civilians in the Jaffna Peninsula . 
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Original:  They claim that the Sri Lankan government has targeted Tamil civilians in the war zone in northern Sri Lanka and are attempting to get the Norwegian government to intervene diplomatically in the conflict to stop the Sri Lankan government from putting civilians at risk.
Revised:  They criticised the Sri Lankan government has targeted Tamil civilians in the war zone in northern Sri Lanka and are attempting to get the Norwegian government to intervene diplomatically in the conflict to stop the Sri Lankan government from putting civilians at risk.
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Original:  They claim that the Sri Lankan government has targeted Tamil civilians in the war zone in northern Sri Lanka and are attempting to get the Norwegian government to intervene diplomatically in the conflict to stop the Sri Lankan government from putting civilians at risk.
Revised:  They claim that the Sri Lankan governments handling of Tamil civilians in the war zone in northern Sri Lanka and are attempting to get the Norwegian government to intervene diplomatically in the conflict to stop the Sri Lankan government from putting civilians at risk.
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Original: File:Tamildemonstration.jpg|Tamil demonstrators at the Storting on Monday.
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Original: Ferry sailings between Dover in the United Kingdom and Calais have been suspended, with UK authorities implementing the Operation Stack management plan in response.
Revised: Ferry sailings between Dover in the United Kingdom and Calais were suspended, with UK authorities implementing the Operation Stack management plan in response.
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Original: The protest is an industrial action over tighter fishing quotas imposed by the European Union, with French fishing unions asking for their govt to provide financial assistance or take a tougher line.
Revised: The protest is an industrial action over tighter fishing quotas imposed by the European Union, with French fishing unions asking for their government to provide financial assistance or take a tougher line.
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Original: The fishermen are protesting the lowering of European Union quotas on fishing, which place a ceiling  the amount of fish that the fishermen of each member country are allowed to catch and sell.
Revised: The fishermen are protesting the lowering of European Union quotas on fishing, which place a ceiling on the amount of fish that the fishermen of each member country are allowed to catch and sell.
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Original: That was the message recently Source: March 25, 2009, press conference at 36th District Court in Detroit from judges and administrators of the 10 Wayne County District Courts taking part in the 2009 Traffic Ticket Amnesty Program April 1 through April 30. “It provides an opportunity for citizens to take care of their traffic tickets, get their licenses back and generate revenue for Detroit,” said 36th District Court Administrator Otis Davis.
Revised: That was the message recently from judges and administrators of the 10 Wayne County District Courts taking part in the 2009 Traffic Ticket Amnesty Program April 1 through April 30. “It provides an opportunity for citizens to take care of their traffic tickets, get their licenses back and generate revenue for Detroit,” said 36th District Court Administrator Otis Davis.
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Original: That was the message recently Source: March 25, 2009, press conference at 36th District Court in Detroit from judges and administrators of the 10 Wayne County District Courts taking part in the 2009 Traffic Ticket Amnesty Program April 1 through April 30. “It provides an opportunity for citizens to take care of their traffic tickets, get their licenses back and generate revenue for Detroit,” said 36th District Court Administrator Otis Davis.
Revised: That was the message recently Source: March 25, 2009, press conference at 36th District Court in Detroit from judges and administrators of the ten Wayne County District Courts taking part in the 2009 Traffic Ticket Amnesty Program April 1 through April 30. “It provides an opportunity for citizens to take care of their traffic tickets, get their licenses back and generate revenue for Detroit,” said 36th District Court Administrator Otis Davis.
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Original: That was the message recently Source: March 25, 2009, press conference at 36th District Court in Detroit from judges and administrators of the 10 Wayne County District Courts taking part in the 2009 Traffic Ticket Amnesty Program April 1 through April 30. “It provides an opportunity for citizens to take care of their traffic tickets, get their licenses back and generate revenue for Detroit,” said 36th District Court Administrator Otis Davis.
Revised: That was the message recently Source: March 25, 2009, press conference at 36th District Court in Detroit from judges and administrators of the 10 Wayne County District Courts taking part in the 2009 Traffic Ticket Amnesty Program from April 1st through April 30th. “It provides an opportunity for citizens to take care of their traffic tickets, get their licenses back and generate revenue for Detroit,” said 36th District Court Administrator Otis Davis.
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Original:  Payable parking tickets are included in the 24th District Court’s amnesty offer . Parking tickets are also reduced in Wayne, Woodhaven, Allen Park, Melvindale and Redford.
Revised:  Payable parking tickets are included in the 24th District Court’s amnesty offer Parking tickets are also reduced in Wayne, Woodhaven, Allen Park, Melvindale and Redford.
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Original:  Payable parking tickets are included in the 24th District Court’s amnesty offer . Parking tickets are also reduced in Wayne, Woodhaven, Allen Park, Melvindale and Redford.
Revised:  Payable parking tickets are included in the 24th District Court’s amnesty offer . and are also reduced in Wayne, Woodhaven, Allen Park, Melvindale and Redford.
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