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Original:  State troopers counting the cash to become ill, and one was hospitalised .
Revised:  State troopers counting the cash became ill, and one was hospitalised .
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Original:  State troopers counting the cash to become ill, and one was hospitalised .
Revised:  State troopers counting the cash to become ill, and one was hospitalized .
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Original:   Entertainment Software Assocation president Douglas Lowenstein confirmed suspicious that his group is planning to file a lawsuit against the state of Oklahoma because of a new law, HB3004.
Revised: right Entertainment Software Assocation president Douglas Lowenstein confirmed suspicious that his group is planning to file a lawsuit against the state of Oklahoma because of a new law, HB3004.
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Original:   Entertainment Software Assocation president Douglas Lowenstein confirmed suspicious that his group is planning to file a lawsuit against the state of Oklahoma because of a new law, HB3004.
Revised:  The Entertainment Software Assocation president Douglas Lowenstein confirmed suspicious that his group is planning to file a lawsuit against the state of Oklahoma because of a new law, HB3004.
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Original: The Entertainment Software Association president Douglas Lowenstein confirmed suspicions that his group is planning to file a lawsuit against the state of Oklahoma because of a new law, HB3004.
Revised: The Entertainment Software Association president Douglas Lowenstein confirmed speculations that his group is planning to file a lawsuit against the state of Oklahoma because of a new law, HB3004.
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Original: Miami star Shaquille O'Neal scored the a low in points for a playoff game and sat out the final 15 minutes.
Revised: Miami star Shaquille O'Neal scored his career low in points for a playoff game and sat out the final 15 minutes.
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Original:  Dallas must win two more games to become the NBA champions
Revised:  With Miami down 2-0 and showing no signs of life, a series comeback, even if the next 3 are at home, seems unlikely
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Original:  O'Neal declined to speak to reporters after the game and was handed a $10,000 fine, as well as a $25,000 fine for the team  .
Revised:  O'Neal was handed a $10,000 fine, as well as a $25,000 fine for the team .
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Original:  O'Neal declined to speak to reporters after the game and was handed a $10,000 fine, as well as a $25,000 fine for the team  .
Revised:  O'Neal declined to speak to reporters after the game and was handed a $10,000 fine, as well as a $25,000 fine for the team , for declining to speak to reporters after the game .
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Original:  "Given the difficult, troubled situation in the region, at a time when counter-terrorism actions are being actively conducted, citizens are obligated to inform [authorities] either verbally or in writing of their intentions" . Such a request was a suprise to many of the players who deemed such activities were fairly common in the area
Revised:  "Given the difficult, troubled situation in the region, at a time when counter-terrorism actions are being actively conducted, citizens are obligated to inform [authorities] either verbally or in writing of their intentions" 
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Original:  Everyone was released within a few hours, but authorities were displeased that they had not informed them of the sporing event earlier.
Revised:  Everyone was released within a few hours, but authorities were displeased that they had not informed them of the sporting event earlier.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the police said that;
Revised:  A spokesperson for the police said ,
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Original:  "Given the difficult, troubled situation in the region, at a time when counter-terrorism actions are being actively conducted, citizens are obligated to inform [authorities] either verbally or in writing of their intentions "
Revised:  "Given the difficult, troubled situation in the region, at a time when counter-terrorism actions are being actively conducted, citizens are obligated to inform [authorities] either verbally or in writing of their intentions .
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Original: Over 100 people were detained by authorities in southern Russian when police mistook a game of rugby as a brawl.
Revised: Over 100 people were detained by authorities in southern Russia when police mistook a game of rugby as a brawl.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the police said, "Given the difficult, troubled situation in the region, at a time when counter-terrorism actions are being actively conducted, citizens are obligated to inform [authorities] either verbally or in writing of their intentions.  
Revised:  A spokesperson for the police said, "Given the difficult, troubled situation in the region, at a time when counter-terrorism actions are being actively conducted, citizens are obligated to inform [authorities] either verbally or in writing of their intentions. " 
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Original: A team headed by Yoh Matsumoto at the Tokyo Metropolitan Institute for Neuroscience in Japan have developed a DNA vaccine, with no side effects, to fight alzheimer 's disease and call the drug "promising."
Revised: A team headed by Yoh Matsumoto at the Tokyo Metropolitan Institute for Neuroscience in Japan have developed a DNA vaccine, with no side effects, to fight Alzheimer 's disease and call the drug "promising."
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Original:  Amyloid proteins, when over produced, are believed to cause the symptoms of the illness by forming masses in the brain that spread.
Revised:  Amyloid proteins, when over produced, are believed to cause the symptoms of the illness by forming masses in the brain , which spread.
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Original:  The vaccine codes itself to the protien , stopping the spread of the masses by not allowing the protein to reproduce.
Revised:  The vaccine codes itself to the protein , stopping the spread of the masses by not allowing the protein to reproduce.
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Original:  The instrument comes into effect from midnight tonight (AEST  .
Revised:  The instrument comes into effect from midnight tonight (AEST ) .
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Original: Australia's Attorney General Phillip Ruddock acknowledged that the Governor-General had conveyed the ACT government's request and despite the ACT government expressing that it would make some amendments to it's act, the Federal Executice Council decided that it was more appropriate to disallow the act all together . Senator Kerry Nettle of the Australian Greens and the Australian Democrats have prepared a disallowance motion they will present on June 14.
Revised: Australia's Attorney General Phillip Ruddock acknowledged that the Governor-General had conveyed the ACT government's request and despite the ACT government expressing that it would make some amendments to its act, the Federal Executice Council decided that it was more appropriate to disallow the act all together . Senator Kerry Nettle of the Australian Greens and the Australian Democrats have prepared a disallowance motion they will present on June 14.
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Original: Australia's Attorney General Phillip Ruddock acknowledged that the Governor-General had conveyed the ACT government's request and despite the ACT government expressing that it would make some amendments to it's act, the Federal Executice Council decided that it was more appropriate to disallow the act all together . Senator Kerry Nettle of the Australian Greens and the Australian Democrats have prepared a disallowance motion they will present on June 14.
Revised: Australia's Attorney General Phillip Ruddock acknowledged that the Governor-General had conveyed the ACT government's request and despite the ACT government expressing that it would make some amendments to it's act, the Federal Executive Council decided that it was more appropriate to disallow the act all together . Senator Kerry Nettle of the Australian Greens and the Australian Democrats have prepared a disallowance motion they will present on June 14.
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Original: Australia's Attorney General Phillip Ruddock acknowledged that the Governor-General had conveyed the ACT government's request and despite the ACT government expressing that it would make some amendments to it's act, the Federal Executice Council decided that it was more appropriate to disallow the act all together . Senator Kerry Nettle of the Australian Greens and the Australian Democrats have prepared a disallowance motion they will present on June 14.
Revised: Australia's Attorney General Phillip Ruddock acknowledged that the Governor-General had conveyed the ACT government's request and despite the ACT government expressing that it would make some amendments to it's act, the Federal Executice Council decided that it was more appropriate to disallow the act altogether . Senator Kerry Nettle of the Australian Greens and the Australian Democrats have prepared a disallowance motion they will present on June 14.
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Original:  If passed, their motion would disalow Ruddock's move to quash the ACT's civil union law.
Revised:  If passed, their motion would disallow Ruddock's move to quash the ACT's civil union law.
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Original: Elsewhere, Hamas militant Hassan Alami was found dead in the Khan Younis camp of Southern Gaza, killed whilst carrying out activities for the group.
Revised: Elsewhere, Hamas militant Hassan Alami was found dead in the Khan Younis camp of Southern Gaza, killed while carrying out activities for the group.
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Original: Meanwhile, Ramallah has accused Lebanese rebel group Hizbollah of attempting to sabotage the fragile peace agreement in the Middle East.
Revised: Meanwhile, Ramallah has accused Lebanese rebel group Hezbolla of attempting to sabotage the fragile peace agreement in the Middle East.
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Original:  The charges mirror those made recently by Israel, which has long accused Hizbollah of bankrolling Palestinian violence in the region.
Revised:  The charges mirror those made recently by Israel, which has long accused Hezbolla of bankrolling Palestinian violence in the region.
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Original:  Hizbollah denies the charges, and claims to be honouring the ceasefire agreed yesterday.
Revised:  Hezbollah denies the charges, and claims to be honouring the ceasefire agreed yesterday.
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Original:  Abbas is shying away from any confrontation with the group at the moment, but has sent an envoy to Beirut to persuade Hizbollah to desist from its aggressive activities.
Revised:  Abbas is shying away from any confrontation with the group at the moment, but has sent an envoy to Beirut to persuade Hezbolla to desist from its aggressive activities.
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Original:  Sharon has agreed to travel to Ramallah to continue talks toward peace in the region .
Revised:  Sharon has agreed to travel to Ramallah to continue talks toward peace in the region 
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Middle East Category:Politics and conflict
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Original: Meanwhile, Ramallah has accused Lebanese rebel group Hezbolla of attempting to sabotage the fragile peace agreement in the Middle East.
Revised: Meanwhile, Ramallah has accused Lebanese rebel group Hezbollah of attempting to sabotage the fragile peace agreement in the Middle East.
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Original:  The charges mirror those made recently by Israel, which has long accused Hezbolla of bankrolling Palestinian violence in the region.
Revised:  The charges mirror those made recently by Israel, which has long accused Hezbollah of bankrolling Palestinian violence in the region.
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Original:  Abbas is shying away from any confrontation with the group at the moment, but has sent an envoy to Beirut to persuade Hezbolla to desist from its aggressive activities.
Revised:  Abbas is shying away from any confrontation with the group at the moment, but has sent an envoy to Beirut to persuade Hezbollah to desist from its aggressive activities.
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Original:  Bush also was to meet with the speaker of the parliament, a few national political leaders and many U.S. troop 
Revised:  Bush also was to meet with the speaker of the parliament, a few national political leaders and many U.S. troops. 
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Original: President George Bush has made a suprise visit to Iraq hoping to bolster some support.
Revised: President George Bush has made a surprise visit to Iraq hoping to bolster some support.
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Original:  Bush also was to meet with the speaker of the parliament, a few national political leaders and many U.S. troops . Category:George W. Bu
Revised:  Bush also was to meet with the speaker of the parliament, a few national political leaders and many U.S. troops Category:George W. Bu
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Original:  Bush also was to meet with the speaker of the parliament, a few national political leaders and many U.S. troops . Category:George W. Bu
Revised:  Bush also was to meet with the speaker of the parliament, a few national political leaders and many U.S. troops . 
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Original: President George  Bush has made a surprise visit to Iraq hoping to bolster some support.
Revised: President George W. Bush has made a surprise visit to Iraq hoping to bolster some support.
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Original:  The protesters who demanded "the revocation of the discrinminatory laws against women in Iran" were intending to have a non-violent gathering but were beaten up and arrested by the police forces.
Revised:  The protesters who demanded "the revocation of the discriminatory laws against women in Iran" were intending to have a non-violent gathering but were beaten up and arrested by the police forces.
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Original:  The protesters who demanded "the revocation of the discriminatory laws against women in Iran   " were intending to have a non-violent gathering but were beaten up and arrested by the police forces.
Revised:  The protesters who demanded "the revocation of the discriminatory laws against women in Iran " 
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Original:  The group were staging a demonstration calling for more equality for women and better protection of their rights under the Iranian law .
Revised:  The group were staging a demonstration calling for equal treatment for women under the Iranian law and better protection of their rights under the Iranian law .
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Original:  The group were staging a demonstration calling for more equality for women and better protection of their rights under the Iranian law .
Revised:  The group were staging a demonstration calling for more equality for women and better protection of their rights .
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Original:  He also said that reports that the police beat up the protestors were being reviewed.
Revised:  He also said that the reports of police beating up the protestors were being reviewed.
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Original:  Under the prevailing laws, women are excluded from constitutional posts such as Judge and President , their testimony in court is only worth half of that of a man.
Revised:  Under the prevailing laws, they are excluded from constitutional posts such as Judge and President , their testimony in court is only worth half of that of a man.
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Original:  Under the prevailing laws, women are excluded from constitutional posts such as Judge and President , their testimony in court is only worth half of that of a man.
Revised:  Under the prevailing laws, women are excluded from constitutional posts such as Judge and President and their testimony in court is only worth half of that of a man.
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Original:  Discrimination against women in Iranian universities at the end of the '90s was at a similar level to that in many Western countries: according to the research ministry of Iran, although women accounted for 56\% of all students in the natural sciences, including one in five Ph.D. students, only about 6\% of full professors, 8\% of associate professors, and 14\% of assistant professors were women in the 1998-99 academic year.
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Original: The Togolese defender hacked down the surging winger Park, who plays his club football for Manchester United , was given a second booking and sent off.
Revised: The Togolese defender hacked down the surging winger Park, who plays his club football for Manchester United . He was given a second booking and sent off.
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Original:  Daniel Gygax's downward header from 5 yards brought a brilliant leg save from the French keeper.
Revised:  Daniel Gygax's downward header from five yards brought a brilliant leg save from the French keeper.
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Original: Former Irish premier Charles J. Haughey has passed away this morning at 10am.
Revised: Former Irish premier Charles J. Haughey has passed away this morning at 10a.m.
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Original:  Reaction was varied, with most concentrating on the positive aspects of his charachter and contributions, and he will have a state funeral on Friday . Reaction: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% OBITUARY UR
Revised:  Reaction was varied, with most concentrating on the positive aspects of his character and contributions. There will be a state funeral on Friday . Reaction: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% OBITUARY UR
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Original:  Reaction was varied, with most concentrating on the positive aspects of his charachter and contributions, and he will have a state funeral on Friday . Reaction: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% OBITUARY UR
Revised:  Reaction was varied, with most concentrating on the positive aspects of his charachter and contributions, and he will have a state funeral on Friday Reaction: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% OBITUARY UR
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Original:  Reaction was varied, with most concentrating on the positive aspects of his charachter and contributions, and he will have a state funeral on Friday . Reaction: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% OBITUARY UR
Revised:  Reaction was varied, with most concentrating on the positive aspects of his charachter and contributions, and he will have a state funeral on Friday . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% OBITUARY UR
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Original:  Former Irish Taoiseach Charles J. Haughey has passed away this morning at 10 a. m.  Widely credited with founding the Celtic Tiger economy, he was never far from controversy with the Arms Crisis and various planning and corruption scandals attributed to him.
Revised: The Former Irish Taoiseach Charles J. Haughey has passed away this morning at 10 a. m. Widely credited with founding the Celtic Tiger economy, he was never far from controversy with the Arms Crisis and various planning and corruption scandals attributed to him.
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Original:  Haughey was suffering from prostate cancer.
Revised: Although no cause was given, Haughey was suffering from prostate cancer.
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Original:  According to police, Kennedy said he was "headed to the Capitol to make a vote." "I am pleading guilty to driving under the influence," Kennedy said to Magistrate Judge Aida Melendez, who presided over the case in the District of Columbia Superior Court.
Revised:  According to police, Kennedy said he was "headed to the Capitol to make a vote." 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Kennedy admitted to taking a sleeping pill called Ambien and also Phenergan, an anti-nausea prescription medication the morning of the accident, but said that he was not drunk.
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Original:  Brazilian forward Ronaldo did not appear interested in the game ;
Revised:  Brazilian forward Ronaldo displayed a distinct lack of interest in the game ;
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Original:  The 72 ' 000 fans in the Olympia Stadium saw the best of Brazil in the first half with Kaka and Ronaldinho bright in midfield.
Revised:  The 72 , 000 fans in the Olympia Stadium saw the best of Brazil in the first half with Kaka and Ronaldinho bright in midfield.
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Original:  Roberto Carlos powered one from 40 yards which was put over by Stipe Pletikosa;
Revised:  Roberto Carlos fired off a shot from 40 yards which was put over by Stipe Pletikosa;
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Original:  The goal when it came was a long-range effort scored by Kaka on 42 minutes.
Revised:  A successful long-range effort scored by Kaka on 42 minutes.
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Original:  The goal when it came was a long-range effort scored by Kaka on 42 minutes.
Revised:  The goal when it came was a long-range effort came from Kaka at 42 minutes.
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Original:  it was Brazil's eigth successive World Cup win which is a tournament record.
Revised:  it was Brazil's eigth successive World Cup win , a tournament record.
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Original:  I don't know what happened to him," Robert Kovac, the Croatian centre-back said.
Revised: " I don't know what happened to him," Robert Kovac, the Croatian centre-back said.
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Original: Yesterday morning Kenneth Thomson  Canada's richest man  was felled by a heart attack.
Revised: Yesterday morning Kenneth Thomson , Canada's richest man was felled by a heart attack.
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Original: Yesterday morning Kenneth Thomson  Canada's richest man  was felled by a heart attack.
Revised: Yesterday morning Kenneth Thomson Canada's richest man , was felled by a heart attack.
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Original: Yesterday morning Kenneth Thomson, Canada's richest man , was felled by a heart attack.
Revised:  Kenneth Thomson, Canada's richest man , was felled by a heart attack.
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Original:  He made most of his money by making his father's trans-Atlantic newspaper  The Globe and Mail  into one of the world's leading resources for electronic information and data.
Revised:  He made most of his money by making his father's trans-Atlantic newspaper ( The Globe and Mail into one of the world's leading resources for electronic information and data.
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Original:  He made most of his money by making his father's trans-Atlantic newspaper  The Globe and Mail  into one of the world's leading resources for electronic information and data.
Revised:  He made most of his money by making his father's trans-Atlantic newspaper The Globe and Mail ) into one of the world's leading resources for electronic information and data.
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Original: 250px Kenneth Thomson, Canada's richest man and the 9th wealthiest person in the world according to Forbes's 2005 ranking, died Monday morning at his office in Toronto.
Revised:  Kenneth Thomson, Canada's richest man and the 9th wealthiest person in the world according to Forbes's 2005 ranking, died Monday morning at his office in Toronto.
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Original: Johnson was elected and re-elected  governor of New Mexico in and as a . During his tenure, he vetoed over 750 bills, more than all other then-governors combined, and left a $1 billion budget surplus.
Revised: Johnson was elected and re-elected as governor of New Mexico in and as a . During his tenure, he vetoed over 750 bills, more than all other then-governors combined, and left a $1 billion budget surplus.
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Original:  In , the party recruited him to run as the their presidential nominee, but he rejected the offer, saying, "I'm a Republican, and I'm not going to run for President."
Revised:  In , the party recruited him to run as their presidential nominee, but he rejected the offer, saying, "I'm a Republican, and I'm not going to run for President."
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