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Original: Despite protests where one person was killed against a new budget-cutting law , Greek lawmakers voted to approve it .
Revised: Despite protests where one person was killed against a new budget-cutting law , Greek lawmakers voted to approve a new budget-cutting law .
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Original:  The result was 154 in favor to 144 against.
Revised:  The result was 154 in favour to 144 against.
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Original:  The new law would bring in tax hikes and wages cuts.
Revised:  The new law would bring in tax hikes and wage cuts.
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Original:  The law, which was unpopular with the Greek people, was aimed to reduce Greece's enormous national debt, which currently stands at 162\% of the country's GDP.
Revised:  The law, unpopular with the Greek people, was aimed to reduce Greece's enormous national debt, which currently stands at 162\% of the country's GDP.
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Original:  The law, which was unpopular with the Greek people, was aimed to reduce Greece's enormous national debt, which currently stands at 162\% of the country's GDP.
Revised:  The law, which was unpopular with the public, aims to reduce Greece's enormous national debt, which currently stands at 162\% of the country's GDP.
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Original:  Tear gas was fired to the protesters, however "these measures are so tough that we won't be scared by a little bit of tear gas," said Yiorgos Lenas, a 29-year-old civil engineer , "People can't take it anymore."
Revised:  Tear gas was fired , but "these measures are so tough that we won't be scared by a little bit of tear gas," said Yiorgos Lenas, a 29-year-old civil engineer , "People can't take it anymore."
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Original:  Tear gas was fired to the protesters, however "these measures are so tough that we won't be scared by a little bit of tear gas," said Yiorgos Lenas, a 29-year-old civil engineer , "People can't take it anymore."
Revised:  Tear gas was fired to the protesters, however "these measures are so tough that we won't be scared by a little bit of tear gas," said Yiorgos Lenas, a 29-year-old civil engineer . "People can't take it anymore."
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Original: Despite protests where one person was killed, Greek lawmakers voted to approve a new budget-cutting law.
Revised: Despite protests where one person was killed, Greek lawmakers voted to pass a new budget-cutting law.
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Original:  Despite a peaceful start to the protest, violent skirmishes erupted between riot police and some of the protesters.
Revised:  Despite a peaceful start to the protest, violent skirmishes erupted between police and some of the protesters.
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Original:  Tear gas was fired, but "these measures are so tough that we won't be scared by a little bit of tear gas," said  Yiorgos Lenas, a 29-year-old civil engineer.
Revised:  Tear gas was fired, but "these measures are so tough that we won't be scared by a little bit of tear gas," said civil engineer Yiorgos Lenas, a 29-year-old civil engineer.
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Original:  Tear gas was fired, but "these measures are so tough that we won't be scared by a little bit of tear gas," said  Yiorgos Lenas, a 29-year-old civil engineer.
Revised:  Tear gas was fired, but "these measures are so tough that we won't be scared by a little bit of tear gas," said Yiorgos Lenas, 29.
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Original:  The Right Reverend Graham Knowles, the Dean of St Paul's Cathedral in London , has announced that the cathedral will shut down.
Revised:  The Right Reverend Graham Knowles, the Dean of in , has announced that the cathedral will shut down.
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Original:  The street area around the cathedral is home to the Occupy London Stock Exchange ('occupylsx') protest that has been running continuously since last Saturday, October 15.
Revised:  The street area around the cathedral is home to the protest that has been running continuously since last Saturday, October 15.
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Original: The   claim could not be immediately confirmed.
Revised: The The claim could not be immediately confirmed.
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Original:  The link to the video was posted on arabic forums, it is breaking new 
Revised:  The link to the video was posted on arabic forums, it is breaking news. 
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Original: Al-Qaeda in Iraq has released video of Sudanese hostages held by them in Iraq they threatened on Thursday to kill five kidnapped employees of the Sudanese Embassy in Baghdad in two days unless Khartoum removes its diplomatic mission from Iraq.
Revised: Al-Qaeda in Iraq has released video of Sudanese hostages held by them in Iraq The video indicates that the militants intend to kill five kidnapped employees of the Sudanese Embassy in Baghdad in two days unless Khartoum removes its diplomatic mission from Iraq.
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Original: Al-Qaeda in Iraq has released video of Sudanese hostages held by them in Iraq they threatened on Thursday to kill five kidnapped employees of the Sudanese Embassy in Baghdad in two days unless Khartoum removes its diplomatic mission from Iraq.
Revised: Al-Qaeda in Iraq has released video of Sudanese hostages held by them in Iraq they threatened on Thursday to kill five kidnapped employees of the Sudanese Embassy in Baghdad in two days unless the Sudanese government removes its diplomatic mission from Iraq.
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Original:  The group, which has kidnapped and killed a string of Arab diplomatic personnel this year, said in a statement on a Web forum where al Qaeda in Iraqi frequently posts messages that it had snatched the five Sudanese, who it said included diplomats.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% URL The link to the video was posted on arabic forums, it is breaking news .
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The link to the video was posted on arabic forums, it is breaking news .
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Original:  Sudan as announced that it will abandon its embassy today, apparently in a bid to free the hostages.
Revised:  Sudan has announced that it will abandon its embassy today, apparently in a bid to free the hostages.
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Original: Two year old Wang Yue from ,  who was by two van drivers and disregarded by eighteen others who passed her has died.
Revised: Two year old Wang Yue from , who was by two van drivers and disregarded by eighteen passers-by has died.
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Original:  Video footage caught by a last week shows the onlookers pass her whilst she lay cataleptic and bleeding in a busy market in , . In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old rubbish collector, who has been proclaimed a hero and he moved her body to the side of the street and got help.
Revised:  Video footage caught by a last week shows the onlookers pass her whilst she lay cataleptic and bleeding in a busy market in . In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old rubbish collector, who has been proclaimed a hero and he moved her body to the side of the street and got help.
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Original:  Video footage caught by a last week shows the onlookers pass her whilst she lay cataleptic and bleeding in a busy market in , . In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old rubbish collector, who has been proclaimed a hero and he moved her body to the side of the street and got help.
Revised:  Video footage caught by a last week shows the onlookers pass her whilst she lay cataleptic and bleeding in a busy market in , . In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old rubbish collector, who has been proclaimed a hero after he moved her body to the side of the street and got help.
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Original:  Video footage caught by a last week shows the onlookers pass her whilst she lay cataleptic and bleeding in a busy market in , . In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old rubbish collector, who has been proclaimed a hero and he moved her body to the side of the street and got help.
Revised:  Video footage caught by a last week shows the onlookers pass her whilst she lay cataleptic and bleeding in a busy market in , . In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old rubbish collector, who has been proclaimed a hero and he moved her to the side of the street and got help.
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Original:  The incident resulted in a worldwide outcry questioning the ethics of the .
Revised:  The incident resulted in a worldwide outcry questioning the ethics of the 
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Original:  In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old rubbish collector, who has been proclaimed a hero after he moved her to the side of the street and got help.
Revised:  In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old garbage collector, who has been proclaimed a hero after he moved her to the side of the street and got help.
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Original:  In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old garbage collector, who has been proclaimed a hero after he moved her to the side of the street and got help.
Revised:  In the end Wang was rescued by a 58 year old rubbish collector, who has been proclaimed a hero after he moved her to the side of the street and got help.
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Original: University of Michigan beat Michigan Tech University with a score of 5-3 in the Great Lakes Invitational ice hockey tournament at Joe Louis Arena in Detroit , Michigan .
Revised: University of Michigan beat Michigan Tech University with a score of 5-3 in the Great Lakes Invitational ice hockey tournament at Joe Louis Arena in Detroit .
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Original:     With 2 minutes remaining in the third period  University of Michigan went one up over Michigan Tech, breaking the 3-3 tie.
Revised:  With 2 minutes remaining in the third period , the University of Michigan went one up over Michigan Tech, breaking the 3-3 tie.
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Original:  Michigan Tech pulled their goalie with one minute remaining to gain a man advantage, but the strategy failed and allowed the University of Michigan to get another goal resulting in the final 5-3 score. category:Sports Category:  Hockey Category:United States Category:Michiga
Revised:  Michigan Tech pulled their goalie with one minute remaining to gain a man advantage, but the strategy failed and allowed the University of Michigan to get another goal resulting in the final 5-3 score. category:Sports Category: Ice Hockey Category:United States Category:Michiga
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Original:  The images returned from that pass will be over 100 times greater resolution, and scientists hope they will help unravel the mystery   
Revised:  The images returned from that pass will be over 100 times greater resolution, and scientists hope they will help unravel the mystery . 
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Original:  Now a narrow ridge of massive proportions, 20 km high and 1,300 km long, has been found bisecting the dark hemisphere .
Revised:  Now a narrow ridge of massive proportions, 20 km high and 1,300 km long, has been found around the equator of the moon .
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Original:  The images returned from that pass will be over 100 times greater resolution  , and scientists hope they will help unravel the mystery.
Revised:  The images returned from that pass will have over 100 times greater resolution , and scientists hope they will help unravel the mystery.
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Original:  His death means that , aged 78, the next in line to the throne becomes crown prince .
Revised:  His death means that , aged 78, the next in line to the thrown .
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Original:  His deathmeans that , aged 78, will be the most likely become the next in line to the thrown .
Revised:  With his death, , aged 78, will be the most likely become the next in line to the thrown .
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Original:  His deathmeans that , aged 78, will be the most likely become the next in line to the thrown .
Revised:  His deathmeans that , aged 78, is considered most likely to become the next in line to the thrown .
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Original:  His deathmeans that , aged 78, will be the most likely become the next in line to the thrown .
Revised:  His deathmeans that , aged 78, will be the most likely become the next in line to the throne .
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Original: He served as the first and was from 1963 to 2011.
Revised: He served as and was from 1963 to 2011.
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Original: He served as  and was from 1963 to 2011.
Revised: He served as the and was from 1963 to 2011.
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Original: He served as the and was from 1963 to 2011.
Revised: He served as and was from 1963 to 2011.
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Original:  By the time she saw a doctor about fatigue and numbness, it was the October 18, and the bat incident was not brought up until several days later.
Revised:  By the time she saw a doctor about fatigue and numbness, it was October 18, and the bat incident was not brought up until several days later.
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Original: On September 12, 2004, Jeanna — a 15 year old from Milwaukee, Wisconsin |Fond du Lac, Wisconsin — was bitten by a bat while attending church.
Revised: On September 12, 2004, Jeanna — a 15 year old from Milwaukee, Wisconsin — was bitten by a bat while attending church.
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Original: The family was abudcted on Wednesday in the east of the country while being on a turism trip on the invitation of the Yemeni government.
Revised: The family was abudcted on Wednesday in the east of the country while being on a tourism trip on the invitation of the Yemeni government.
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Original:  The Yemeni defence minister was apparently the one who was able to negotiate the release
Revised:  The Yemeni defense minister was apparently the one who was able to negotiate the release
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Original:  The Yemeni defense minister was apparently the one who was able to negotiate the release  
Revised:  The Yemeni defense minister was apparently the one who was able to negotiate the release . 
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Original: 150px|Jürgen Chrobog (1995) Jürgen Chrobog, former state secretary in the German Foreign Office, his wife and their three sons have been freed, German foreign minister Frank-Walter Steinmeier confirmed at a press conference.
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Original: With a charter from 1893 and the as its chancellor, problems began at UoW last year after concerns the head of a Malaysian partner institution, a local pop artist, had non-legitimate qualifications.
Revised: With a from 1893 and the as its chancellor, problems began at UoW last year after concerns the head of a Malaysian partner institution, a local pop artist, had non-legitimate qualifications.
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Original:  Two colleges - and - are suspended over the claims    ] 
Revised:  Two colleges - and - are suspended over the claims . ] 
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Original:  Two colleges - and - are suspended over the claims    ] 
Revised:  Two colleges - and - are suspended over the claims .] 
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Original:   With a from 1893 and the as its chancellor, problems began at UoW last year after concerns the head of a Malaysian partner institution, a local pop artist, had non-legitimate qualifications.
Revised:  250px With a from 1893 and the as its chancellor, problems began at UoW last year after concerns the head of a Malaysian partner institution, a local pop artist, had non-legitimate qualifications.
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Original: The said UoW's overseas checks on foreign institutions was inadequate.
Revised: The said UoW's overseas checks on foreign institutions were inadequate.
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Original:  "I warmly welcome the historic decision taken today by the University of Wales Council," said UoW Vice President Professor Medwin Hughes, who will fill the same role for the new University of Wales: Trinity St David.
Revised:  "I warmly welcome the historic decision taken today by the University of Wales Council," said UoW Vice-Chancellor Professor Medwin Hughes, who will fill the same role for the new University of Wales: Trinity St David.
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Original:  In recent weeks the has launched a probe into a possible visa scam whereby foreign students were sold exam answers for a qualification leading to UoW entry and British visas.
Revised:  The is investigating a possible visa scam whereby foreign students were sold exam answers for a qualification leading to UoW entry and British visas.
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Original:  There has been no suspects and he will make a speedy recovery . for rapper
Revised:  There has been no suspects and he will make a speedy recovery for rapper
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Original:  There has been no suspects and he will make a speedy recovery . for rapper
Revised:  There has been no suspects and he will make a speedy recovery . 
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Original: The popular black rapper named Obie Trice was shot on a Detroit Freeway.
Revised: The popular rapper named Obie Trice was shot on a Detroit Freeway.
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Original:  Eminem influenced Obie Trice in his rapping skills.
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Original:  He was at Provindence Hospital where he healed his wounds.
Revised:  He was at Provindence Hospital where he will heal his wounds.
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Original:  There has been no suspects and he will  make a speedy recovery
Revised:  So far There is no suspects and he will make a speedy recovery
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Original:  There has been no suspects and he will  make a speedy recovery
Revised:  There has been no suspects and he will most likely make a speedy recovery
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Original:  He is  at Provindence Hospital where he will heal his wounds . So far There is no suspects and he will most likely make a speedy recovery
Revised:  He is currently at Provindence Hospital where he will heal his wounds . So far There is no suspects and he will most likely make a speedy recovery
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Original:  He is  at Provindence Hospital where he will heal his wounds . So far There is no suspects and he will most likely make a speedy recovery
Revised:  He is at Provindence Hospital where he is expected to have a speedy recovery . So far There is no suspects and he will most likely make a speedy recovery
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Original:  He is  at Provindence Hospital where he will heal his wounds . So far There is no suspects and he will most likely make a speedy recovery
Revised:  He is at Provindence Hospital where he will heal his wounds . So far there is no suspects and he will most likely make a speedy recovery
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Original:  Trice drove off the freeway and into a suburb where his girlfriend, who did not get hurt , waved down the police.
Revised:  Trice drove off the freeway and into a suburb where his girlfriend, uninjured in the incident , waved down the police.
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Original:  He is currently at Provindence Hospital where he is expected to have a speedy recovery .
Revised:  He is currently at Provindence Hospital ,where a speedy recovery .
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Original:  There are currently no suspects in the shooting  
Revised:  There are currently no suspects in the shooting . 
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Original:  Many places drop various objects to celebrate new years, such as a giant M&M in Elizabethtown, Pennsylvania, or two pears in Fredericksburg, Virginia  
Revised:  Many places drop various objects to celebrate new years, such as a giant M&M in Elizabethtown, Pennsylvania, or two pears in Fredericksburg, Virginia . 
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Original: Fireworks are often associated with new years As midnight moves across the globe, millions of people are welcoming the new year with fireworks and other celebrations.
Revised: Fireworks are often associated with new years As midnight sweeped the globe, millions of people are welcoming the new year with fireworks and other celebrations.
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Original: Fireworks are often associated with new years As midnight moves across the globe, millions of people are welcoming the new year with fireworks and other celebrations.
Revised: Fireworks are often associated with new years As midnight moves across the globe, millions of people welcomed the new year with fireworks and other celebrations.
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Original:  Sydney led the way with red lights on the Sydney Harbour Bridge and over 80 000 fireworks over the water.
Revised:  Sydney led the way with red lights on the Harbour Bridge and over 80 000 fireworks over the water.
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Original:  In New York it is expected to be the second largest celebration, with between 800 000 and 1 million people , as the  waterford crystal ball drops from time square.
Revised:  New York welcomed the new year, with hundreds of thousands of people gathered in Times Square , as the waterford crystal ball drops from time square.
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Original:  In New York it is expected to be the second largest celebration, with between 800 000 and 1 million people , as the  waterford crystal ball drops from time square.
Revised:  In New York it is expected to be the second largest celebration, with between 800 000 and 1 million people , as the famous waterford crystal ball drops from time square.
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Original:  In Toronto, the new year was celebrated at Nathan Philips Square.
Revised:  Among other notable celebrations across the world was Toronto, which celebrated the new year was celebrated at Nathan Philips Square.
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Original:  In Toronto, the new year was celebrated at Nathan Philips Square.
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Original:  It is expected to be one of the largest Celebrations , with over 1.2 million people.
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Original:  New York welcomed the new year, with hundreds of thousands of people gathered in Times Square, as the famous waterford crystal ball dropped and confetti rained over the crowed .
Revised:  New York welcomed the new year, with hundreds of thousands of people gathered in Times Square, as the famous waterford crystal ball dropped and confetti rained over the crowd .
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Original: Fireworks are often associated with new year celebrations As midnight swept the globe, millions of people welcomed the new year with fireworks and other celebrations . Sydney  led the way with red lights on the Harbour Bridge and over 80  000 fireworks over the water.
Revised: Fireworks are often associated with new year celebrations As midnight swept the globe, millions of people welcomed the new year with fireworks and other celebrations . Sydney led the way with red lights on the Harbour Bridge and over 80 , 000 fireworks over the water.
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Original:  It is expected to be one of the largest celebrations, with over 1.2 million people .
Revised:  Over 1.2 million people were reported to have attended this celebration, making it one of the largest celebrations, with over 1.2 million people .
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Original:  It is expected to be one of the largest celebrations, with over 1.2 million people .
Revised:  It is expected to be one of the largest in the world .
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Original:  New York welcomed the new year, with hundreds of thousands of people gathered in Times Square , as the famous waterford crystal balldropped and confetti rained over the crowd.
Revised:  New York City Hundreds of thousands of people gathered in Times Square , as the famous waterford crystal balldropped and confetti rained over the crowd.
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Original:  New York welcomed the new year, with hundreds of thousands of people gathered in Times Square , as the famous waterford crystal balldropped and confetti rained over the crowd.
Revised:  New York welcomed the new year, with hundreds of thousands of people gathered in Times Square to see the historic lowering of the Waterford crystal ball, a tradition began in 1906.
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Original:   Among other notable celebrations across the world was Toronto, which celebrated the new year in Nathan Philips Square.
Revised:  Toronto Among other notable celebrations across the world was Toronto, which celebrated the new year in Nathan Philips Square.
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