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Original:  She has also been featured on the most recent The Legendary Tigerman  album, Femina .
Revised:  She has also been featured on the The Legendary Tigerman album, Femina .
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Original: Background After Francoist Spain granted Equatorial Guinea independence in 1968, a power struggle between Macías and Atanasio Ndongo Miyone led to the former assuming the presidency.
Revised: Backround After Francoist Spain granted Equatorial Guinea independence in 1968, a power struggle between Macías and Atanasio Ndongo Miyone led to the former assuming the presidency.
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Original:  Macías subsequently consolidated national political authority, making himself the absolute dictator of the country.
Revised:  Macías subsequently consolidated national political authority, making himself the totalitarian dictator of the country.
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Original:  An estimated 35,000-50,000 people died during Macías' time in power, many of them in mass killings or imprisonment in the country's notorious prison camps, and  by 1979  25\% of the country's population lived in exile.
Revised:  An estimated 35,000-50,000 people died during Macías' time in power, many of them in mass killings or imprisonment in the country's notorious prison camps, and , by 1979 25\% of the country's population lived in exile.
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Original:  An estimated 35,000-50,000 people died during Macías' time in power, many of them in mass killings or imprisonment in the country's notorious prison camps, and  by 1979  25\% of the country's population lived in exile.
Revised:  An estimated 35,000-50,000 people died during Macías' time in power, many of them in mass killings or imprisonment in the country's notorious prison camps, and by 1979 , 25\% of the country's population lived in exile.
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Original: Doyle, Tosey & Walker, 2010 ) Clean Language can also be used in addition to a therapist or coach's existing approach.
Revised: Doyle, Tosey & Walker, 2010 Clean Language can also be used in addition to a therapist or coach's existing approach.
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Original: David Grove Clean Language originated with New Zealand-born and educated David Grove, who drew on his bicultural Māori/ Pākeha roots when designing therapeutic and coaching methods.
Revised: David Grove Clean Language originated with New Zealand-born and educated David Grove, who drew on his bi-cultural Māori/ Pākeha roots when designing therapeutic and coaching methods.
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Original: Obituary, NZAC Counselling Today, June 2008 URL Clean Language in detail Prior to the use of the term "Clean Language" David taught and practiced his methods in the context of healing complex trauma.
Revised: Obituary, NZAC Counselling Today, June 2008 URL Clean language in detail Prior to the use of the term "Clean Language" David taught and practiced his methods in the context of healing complex trauma.
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Original:  In the following years his workshop materials included such titles as "Metaphors to Heal by","Resolving Traumatic Memories ", "Healing the Wounded Child Within", and "In the Presence of the Past", Nonverbal Behaviour Nonverbal behaviour is the way the facilitator uses his or her body to expresses themself in addition to spoken words .
Revised:  In the following years his workshop materials included such titles as "Metaphors to Heal by","Resolving Traumatic Memories ", "Healing the Wounded Child Within", and "In the Presence of the Past", Non-verbal behaviour Non-verbal behaviour is the way the facilitator uses his or her body to expresses themself in addition to spoken words .
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Original:  In the following years his workshop materials included such titles as "Metaphors to Heal by","Resolving Traumatic Memories ", "Healing the Wounded Child Within", and "In the Presence of the Past", Nonverbal Behaviour Nonverbal behaviour is the way the facilitator uses his or her body to expresses themself in addition to spoken words .
Revised:  In the following years his workshop materials included such titles as "Metaphors to Heal by","Resolving Traumatic Memories ", "Healing the Wounded Child Within", and "In the Presence of the Past", Nonverbal Behaviour Nonverbal behaviour is the way someone expresses themselves in addition to spoken words .
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Original:  In the following years his workshop materials included such titles as "Metaphors to Heal by","Resolving Traumatic Memories ", "Healing the Wounded Child Within", and "In the Presence of the Past", Nonverbal Behaviour Nonverbal behaviour is the way the facilitator uses his or her body to expresses themself in addition to spoken words .
Revised:  In the following years his workshop materials included such titles as "Metaphors to Heal by","Resolving Traumatic Memories ", "Healing the Wounded Child Within", and "In the Presence of the Past", Nonverbal Behaviour Nonverbal behaviour is the way the facilitator uses his or her body to expresses themself in addition to spoken word .
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Original:  The facilitator minimises their own nonverbal behaviour and does not mirror the movements of the client's body.
Revised:  The facilitator minimises their own non-verbal behaviour and does not mirror the movements of the client's body.
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Original:  Training Exercise Some life coach training suggest the following Clean Language self-coaching exercise: Write down the Clean Language questions on strips of paper, fold these or arrange them randomly on a table face down.
Revised:  Training exercise Some life coach training suggest the following Clean Language self-coaching exercise: Write down the Clean Language questions on strips of paper, fold these or arrange them randomly on a table face down.
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Original:  Research Methodology Clean Language is being used to enhance the authenticity and rigour of interview-based qualitative research.
Revised:  Research methodology Clean Language is being used to enhance the authenticity and rigour of interview-based qualitative research.
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Original:  Clean Language intends to support clients discovering and developing their own symbols and metaphors, prior to the therapist/coach/interviewer suggesting-contributing their own framing of a topic.
Revised:  Clean Language intends to support clients discovering and developing their own symbols and metaphors, rather than the therapist/coach/interviewer suggesting-contributing their own framing of a topic.
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Original: Clean Language is a technique primarily used in counseling, psychotherapy and coaching but now also used in education, business, organisational change and health.
Revised: Clean language is a technique primarily used in counseling, psychotherapy and coaching but now also used in education, business, organisational change and health.
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Original: Lawley  & Tompkins  2000 More recently it has been applied as a research interview technique  . Clean Language intends to support clients  discovering and developing their own symbols and metaphors, rather than the therapist/coach/interviewer suggesting-contributing their own framing of a topic.
Revised: Lawley & Tompkins 2000 More recently it has been applied as a research interview technique . Clean language aims to support clients discovering and developing their own symbols and metaphors, rather than the therapist/coach/interviewer suggesting-contributing their own framing of a topic.
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Original: Lawley  & Tompkins  2000 More recently it has been applied as a research interview technique  . Clean Language intends to support clients  discovering and developing their own symbols and metaphors, rather than the therapist/coach/interviewer suggesting-contributing their own framing of a topic.
Revised: Lawley & Tompkins 2000 More recently it has been applied as a research interview technique . Clean Language intends to support clients in discovering and developing their own symbols and metaphors, rather than the therapist/coach/interviewer suggesting-contributing their own framing of a topic.
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Original: Lawley  & Tompkins  2000 More recently it has been applied as a research interview technique  . Clean Language intends to support clients  discovering and developing their own symbols and metaphors, rather than the therapist/coach/interviewer suggesting-contributing their own framing of a topic.
Revised: Lawley & Tompkins 2000 More recently it has been applied as a research interview technique . Clean Language intends to support clients discovering and developing their own symbols and metaphors, rather than the therapist/coach/interviewer suggesting or contributing their own framing of a topic.
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Original:  In other words, instead of "supporting" the client by offering them ready-made metaphors, when the counselor senses  a metaphor would be useful ;
Revised:  In other words, instead of "supporting" the client by offering them ready-made metaphors, when the counselor senses that a metaphor would be useful ;
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Original:  The client is invited to innovate their own metaphor.
Revised:  The client is invited to invent their own metaphor.
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Original:  Clean Language was devised by David Grove in the 1980s as a result of his work on clinical methods for resolving clients' traumatic memories.
Revised:  Clean language was devised by David Grove in the 1980s as a result of his work on clinical methods for resolving clients' traumatic memories.
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Original: Lawley  & Tompkins , 2001  Clean Language also is the basis of Symbolic Modelling , a stand-alone method and process for psychotherapy and coaching , developed by Lawley and Tompkins;
Revised: Lawley & Tompkins , 2001 Clean language also is the basis of Symbolic Modelling , a stand-alone method and process for psychotherapy and coaching , developed by Lawley and Tompkins;
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Original: Lawley  & Tompkins , 2001  Clean Language also is the basis of Symbolic Modelling , a stand-alone method and process for psychotherapy and coaching , developed by Lawley and Tompkins;
Revised: Lawley & Tompkins , 2001 Clean Language also is the basis for symbolic modeling , a stand-alone method and process for psychotherapy and coaching , developed by Lawley and Tompkins;
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Original: Lawley  & Tompkins , 2001  Clean Language also is the basis of Symbolic Modelling , a stand-alone method and process for psychotherapy and coaching , developed by Lawley and Tompkins;
Revised: Lawley & Tompkins , 2001 Clean Language also is the basis of Symbolic Modelling , a stand-alone method and process for psychotherapy and coaching developed by Lawley and Tompkins;
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Original: Owen, 1989 David Grove Clean Language originated with New Zealand-born and educated David Grove, who drew on his bi-cultural Māori/British roots when designing therapeutic and coaching methods.
Revised: Owen, 1989 David Grove Clean language originated with New Zealand-born and educated David Grove, who drew on his bi-cultural Māori/British roots when designing therapeutic and coaching methods.
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Original:  Grove had degrees from University of Canterbury and University of Otago in New Zealand, and a Masters in Counselling Psychology at Minnesota State University Moorhead.
Revised:  Grove had degrees from University of Canterbury and University of Otago in New Zealand, and a masters in counselling psychology at Minnesota State University Moorhead.
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Original:  Grove served as a consulting psychologist with the London Phobic Trust, and published a book with Basil Panzer, Resolving traumatic memories: metaphors and symbols in psychotherapy (1989/1991).
Revised:  Grove served as a consulting psychologist with the London Phobic Trust, and published a book with Basil Panzer, Resolving Traumatic Memories: Metaphors and Symbols in Psychotherapy (1989/1991).
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Original:  He died on 8 January 2008 Death Notices in New Zealand Herald, 17 January 2008.
Revised:  He died on 8 January 2008. Death Notices in New Zealand Herald, 17 January 2008.
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Original: Obituary,  NZAC Counselling Today, June 2008 URL Grove's Clean Language was initially designed to address the needs of patients who were suffering from traumatic memories, particularly to facilitate in their capability to resolve blocks and phobias.
Revised: Obituary, . NZAC Counselling Today, June 2008 URL Grove's Clean Language was initially designed to address the needs of patients who were suffering from traumatic memories, particularly to facilitate in their capability to resolve blocks and phobias.
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Original: Obituary,  NZAC Counselling Today, June 2008 URL Grove's Clean Language was initially designed to address the needs of patients who were suffering from traumatic memories, particularly to facilitate in their capability to resolve blocks and phobias.
Revised: Obituary, NZAC Counselling Today, June 2008. Grove's Clean Language was initially designed to address the needs of patients who were suffering from traumatic memories, particularly to facilitate in their capability to resolve blocks and phobias.
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Original: Obituary,  NZAC Counselling Today, June 2008 URL Grove's Clean Language was initially designed to address the needs of patients who were suffering from traumatic memories, particularly to facilitate in their capability to resolve blocks and phobias.
Revised: Obituary, NZAC Counselling Today, June 2008 URL Grove's clean language was initially designed to address the needs of patients who were suffering from traumatic memories, particularly to facilitate in their capability to resolve blocks and phobias.
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Original:  This was achieved through the description of subjective experiences and identifying specific phrases, which are then made less abstract to elicit the link between speech and lived experience.
Revised:  This is achieved through the description of subjective experiences and identifying specific phrases, which are then made less abstract to elicit the link between speech and lived experience.
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Original:  Grove's work on Clean Language also spawned the field of Emergent Knowledge .
Revised:  Grove's work on clean language also spawned the field of Emergent Knowledge .
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Original:  Grove's work on Clean Language also spawned the field of Emergent Knowledge .
Revised:  Grove's work on Clean Language also spawned the field of "emergent knowledge" .
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Original:  Clean language in detail Prior to the use of the term " Clean Language " David taught and practiced his methods in the context of healing complex trauma.
Revised:  Clean language in detail Prior to the use of the term " clean language " David taught and practiced his methods in the context of healing complex trauma.
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Original:  See Grove, David J. Panzer, Basil I. (1989).
Revised:  Panzer, Basil I. (1989).
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Original:  See Grove, David J. Panzer, Basil I. (1989).
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Original:  Clean Language combines four elements of communication: syntax, wording of questions, vocal qualities, and non-verbal behaviour.
Revised:  Clean language combines four elements of communication: syntax, wording of questions, vocal qualities, and non-verbal behaviour.
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Original:  Lawley Tompkins 2000 Note: Practitioners of Clean Language often refer to the person asking questions as the 'facilitator' and the person receiving the questions the 'client'.
Revised:  Tompkins 2000 Note: Practitioners of Clean Language often refer to the person asking questions as the 'facilitator' and the person receiving the questions the 'client'.
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Original:  Lawley Tompkins 2000 Note: Practitioners of Clean Language often refer to the person asking questions as the 'facilitator' and the person receiving the questions the 'client'.
Revised:  Lawley Note: Practitioners of Clean Language often refer to the person asking questions as the 'facilitator' and the person receiving the questions the 'client'.
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Original:  Syntax In a therapeutic context, Clean Language questions often make use of the “ full 3-part syntax ” which has the format: And [client ’ s words/non-verbals] …
Revised:  Syntax In a therapeutic context, clean language questions often make use of the “ full 3-part syntax ” which has the format: And [client ’ s words/non-verbals] …
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Original:  Syntax In a therapeutic context, Clean Language questions often make use of the “ full 3-part syntax ” which has the format: And [client ’ s words/non-verbals] …
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Original:  Syntax In a therapeutic context, Clean Language questions often make use of the “ full 3-part syntax ” which has the format: And [client ’ s words/non-verbals] …
Revised:  Syntax In a therapeutic context, Clean Language questions often make use of the “ full 3-part syntax " which has the format: And [client ’ s words/non-verbals] …
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Original:  Syntax In a therapeutic context, Clean Language questions often make use of the “ full 3-part syntax ” which has the format: And [client ’ s words/non-verbals] …
Revised:  Syntax In a therapeutic context, Clean Language questions often make use of the “ full 3-part syntax ” which has the format: And [client ' s words/non-verbals] …
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Original:  Syntax In a therapeutic context, Clean Language questions often make use of the “ full 3-part syntax ” which has the format: And [client ’ s words/non-verbals] …
Revised:  Syntax In a therapeutic context, Clean Language questions often make use of the “ full 3-part syntax ” which has the format: And [client ’ s words/non-verbals] ...
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Original:  and when/as [client ’ s words/ non-verbals] …
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Original:  and when/as [client ’ s words/ non-verbals] …
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Original:  This structure is derived from Grove ’ s early hypnotic work, and is designed to direct attention, minimize cognitive load, and make it easier for the client to remain in the inner-directed state that the questions generate.
Revised:  This structure is derived from Grove ' s early hypnotic work, and is designed to direct attention, minimize cognitive load, and make it easier for the client to remain in the inner-directed state that the questions generate.
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Original:  Outside the therapeutic context, a more “everyday” syntax tends to be used.
Revised:  Outside the therapeutic context, a more "everyday" syntax tends to be used.
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Original: Martin  2007  Wording of questions Clean Language questions seek to minimise content that comes from the questioner's "maps" — metaphors, assumptions, paradigms or sensations — that could direct the questionee's attention away from increased awareness of his or her own (metaphorical) representation of experience thereby "diminishing their epistemological nature".
Revised: Martin 2007 Wording of questions Clean language questions seek to minimise content that comes from the questioner's "maps" — metaphors, assumptions, paradigms or sensations — that could direct the questionee's attention away from increased awareness of his or her own (metaphorical) representation of experience thereby "diminishing their epistemological nature".
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Original: Pincus  & Sheikh,  2011  Clean Language offers a template for questions that are as free as possible of the facilitator's suggestions, presuppositions, mind-reading, second guessing, references and metaphors.
Revised: Pincus & Sheikh, 2011 Clean language offers a template for questions that are as free as possible of the facilitator's suggestions, presuppositions, mind-reading, second guessing, references and metaphors.
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Original:  Note: Clean Language facilitators do not follow popular generalised assumptions about the meaning of 'body language' (e.g. assuming that crossed arms mean the person is 'closed'), preferring to ask about the meaning such behaviour has for the client.
Revised:  Clean language facilitators do not follow popular generalised assumptions about the meaning of 'body language' (e.g. assuming that crossed arms mean the person is 'closed'), preferring to ask about the meaning such behaviour has for the client.
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Original:  Lawley Tompkins, 2000 p.85 Vocal qualities Voice speed, tone and volume can all affect the kind of attention the client pays to their own experience.
Revised:  Tompkins, 2000 p.85 Vocal qualities Voice speed, tone and volume can all affect the kind of attention the client pays to their own experience.
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Original:  Lawley Tompkins, 2000 p.85 Vocal qualities Voice speed, tone and volume can all affect the kind of attention the client pays to their own experience.
Revised:  Lawley Vocal qualities Voice speed, tone and volume can all affect the kind of attention the client pays to their own experience.
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Original:  Example Clean Language questions are designed to reduce to a minimum any influence from the facilitator's ' map of the world ' via his or her metaphors, interpretations or unwarranted assumptions.
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Original:  Example Clean Language questions are designed to reduce to a minimum any influence from the facilitator's ' map of the world ' via his or her metaphors, interpretations or unwarranted assumptions.
Revised:  Example Clean Language questions are designed to reduce to a minimum any influence from the facilitator's " map of the world ' via his or her metaphors, interpretations or unwarranted assumptions.
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Original:  Example Clean Language questions are designed to reduce to a minimum any influence from the facilitator's ' map of the world ' via his or her metaphors, interpretations or unwarranted assumptions.
Revised:  Example Clean Language questions are designed to reduce to a minimum any influence from the facilitator's ' map of the world " via his or her metaphors, interpretations or unwarranted assumptions.
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Original:  An example dialog is as follows: Non-Clean Language facilitator responses might include: "I know this can be uncomfortable." "Are you ill?" "Do you want to feel normal?" "What would happen if you didn't?" "Stop complaining!"
Revised:  An example dialog is as follows: Non-clean language facilitator responses might include: "I know this can be uncomfortable." "Are you ill?" "Do you want to feel normal?" "What would happen if you didn't?" "Stop complaining!"
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Original:  Clean Language facilitator responses might include: "And where do you feel strange?" "And what kind of strange?" "And that's strange like what?" "And is there anything else about that 'feels strange'?" "And what happens just before you feel strange?" "And when you feel strange, what would you like to have happen?"
Revised:  Clean language facilitator responses might include: "And where do you feel strange?" "And what kind of strange?" "And that's strange like what?" "And is there anything else about that 'feels strange'?" "And what happens just before you feel strange?" "And when you feel strange, what would you like to have happen?"
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