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Original:  There are over 500 statues of Kim Il-sung in North Korea, similar to the many statues and monuments that Eastern Bloc leaders put up in honor of themselves.
Revised: Kim Il-sung was a godlike figure within North Korea, but his personality cult struggled to extend beyond the country's borders. There are over 500 statues of Kim Il-sung in North Korea, similar to the many statues and monuments that Eastern Bloc leaders put up in honor of themselves.
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Original:  There are over 500 statues of Kim Il-sung in North Korea, similar to the many statues and monuments that Eastern Bloc leaders put up in honor of themselves.
Revised:  There are over 500 statues of him in North Korea, similar to the many statues and monuments that Eastern Bloc leaders put up in honor of themselves.
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Original:  It is also placed prominently at the border crossings between China and North Korea  .
Revised:  It is also placed prominently near the border crossings between China and North Korea .
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Original:  Black Book of Communism, pg. 564.
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Original: "Enver Hoxha, "Reflections on China II: Extracts from the Political Diary", Institute of Marxist–Leninist Studies at the Central Committee of the Party of Labour of Albania, " Tirana, 1979, pp 516, 517, 521, 547, 548, 549.
Revised: "Enver Hoxha, "Reflections on China II: Extracts from the Political Diary", Institute of Marxist–Leninist Studies at the Central Committee of the Party of Labour of Albania, Tirana, 1979, pp 516, 517, 521, 547, 548, 549.
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Original:  North Korea - From 1970 to the death of Kim Il-Sung on Encyclopædia Britannica.
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Original:  "Controversy Stirs Over Kim Monument at PUST" NK Daily. . Retrieved 24 April 2010.
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Original:  See also March for Jesus%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References
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Original: Career progression Often aspiring musicians start out as sidemen, playing rhythm guitar, comping on keyboards, or playing drum kit in the rhythm section or singing backing vocals for a well-known bandleader or singer.
Revised: Career progression Aspiring musicians often start out as sidemen, playing rhythm guitar, comping on keyboards, or playing drum kit in the rhythm section or singing backing vocals for a well-known bandleader or singer.
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Original: Career progression Aspiring musicians often start out as sidemen, playing rhythm guitar, comping on keyboards, or playing drum kit in the rhythm section  or singing backing vocals for a well-known bandleader or singer.
Revised: Career progression Aspiring musicians often start out as sidemen, playing rhythm guitar, comping on keyboards, playing drums in the rhythm section or singing backing vocals for a well-known bandleader or singer.
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Original: Career progression Aspiring musicians often start out as sidemen, playing rhythm guitar, comping on keyboards, or playing drum kit in the rhythm section  or singing backing vocals for a well-known bandleader or singer.
Revised: Career progression Aspiring musicians often start out as sidemen, playing rhythm guitar, comping on keyboards, or playing drum kit in the rhythm section , or singing backing vocals for a well-known bandleader or singer.
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Original:  Jimmy Page left his first attempts working in bands , to hone his skills as a session player, where he met John Paul Jones and sought and recruited Robert Plant and John Bonham to form Led Zeppelin.
Revised:  Jimmy Page left his first attempts working in bands to hone his skills as a session player, where he met John Paul Jones and sought and recruited Robert Plant and John Bonham to form Led Zeppelin.
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Original:  Jimmy Page left his first attempts working in bands , to hone his skills as a session player, where he met John Paul Jones and sought and recruited Robert Plant and John Bonham to form Led Zeppelin.
Revised:  Jimmy Page left his first attempts working in bands , to hone his skills as a session player, where he met John Paul Jones ; he later recruited Robert Plant and John Bonham to form Led Zeppelin.
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Original:  Some examples of this are: James Burton and Glen D. Hardin, playing guitar and keyboards respectively, who performed in the backing band for Elvis Presley , also backed Gram Parsons before joining newcomer Rodney Crowell and veteran Albert Lee in Emmylou Harris' "Hot Band".
Revised:  Some examples of this are: James Burton and Glen Hardin, playing guitar and keyboards respectively, who performed in the backing band for Elvis Presley , also backed Gram Parsons before joining newcomer Rodney Crowell and veteran Albert Lee in Emmylou Harris' "Hot Band".
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Original:  Bob Dylan's first recorded song was as a harmonica sideman on Harry Belafonte's cover of "Midnight URL
Revised:  Bob Dylan's first recorded song was as a harmonica sideman on Harry Belafonte's cover of "Midnight Special".
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Original: 1976 deaths Category:Afrikaner people Category:White South African people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African female swimmers Category: Female freestyle swimmers Category:Olympic swimmers of South Africa Category:Swimmers at the 1928 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic bronze medalists for South Africa Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Transvaal Colony people Category:Olympic bronze medalists in swimming Category:Medalists at the 1928 Summer Olympi
Revised: 1976 deaths Category:Afrikaner people Category:White South African people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African female swimmers Category: South African female freestyle swimmers Category:Olympic swimmers of South Africa Category:Swimmers at the 1928 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic bronze medalists for South Africa Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Transvaal Colony people Category:Olympic bronze medalists in swimming Category:Medalists at the 1928 Summer Olympi
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Original: The Ekumeku Movement consisted of a series of uprisings against the rising power of the Royal Niger Company of the British Empire in Anioma , the Igbo subgroup in present day Delta State.
Revised: The Ekumeku Movement consisted of a series of uprisings against the rising power of the Royal Niger Company of the British Empire in Anioma people in present day Delta State.
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Original:  Heroes included Dunkwu Isus of Onicha-Olona, Nwabuzo Iyogolo of Ogwashi-Ukwu, Awuno Ugbo, Obi of Akumazi, Agbambu Oshue of Igbuzo, Idabor of Issele-Ukwu , Ochei Aghaeze of Onicha-Olona, Abuzu of Idumuje-Unor, Idegwu Otokpoike of Ubulu-Ukwu are still remembered in Anioma land.
Revised:  Heroes included Dunkwu Isus of Onicha-Olona, Nwabuzo Iyogolo of Ogwashi-Ukwu, Awuno Ugbo, Obi of Akumazi, Agbambu Oshue of Igbuzo, Idabor of Issele-Azagba , Ochei Aghaeze of Onicha-Olona, Abuzu of Idumuje-Unor, Idegwu Otokpoike of Ubulu-Ukwu are still remembered in Anioma land.
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Original: History Opposition was strong in Anioma land where a series of wars were waged against the British.
Revised: History The opposition was strong in Anioma land where a series of wars were waged against the British.
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Original:  The Ekumeku, who were well organised and whose leaders were joined in secrecy oaths, effectively utilised guerrilla tactics to attack the British.
Revised:  The Ekumeku, who were well organized and whose leaders were joined in secrecy oaths, effectively utilised guerrilla tactics to attack the British.
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Original:  The Ekumeku, who were well organised and whose leaders were joined in secrecy oaths, effectively utilised guerrilla tactics to attack the British.
Revised:  The Ekumeku, who were well organised and whose leaders were joined in secrecy oaths, effectively utilized guerrilla tactics to attack the British.
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Original:  First, the length of time the movement endured, comprising Military campaigns over a period of thirty one years.
Revised:  First, the length of time the movement endured, comprising Military campaigns over a period of thirty-one years.
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Original:  Secondly it is the outstanding example in  Anioma Civilization of an attempt to unite previously disunited states to resist the colonial army.
Revised:  Secondly , it is an outstanding example in Anioma Civilization of an attempt to unite previously disunited states to resist the colonial army.
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Original:  Secondly it is the outstanding example in  Anioma Civilization of an attempt to unite previously disunited states to resist the colonial army.
Revised:  Secondly it is the outstanding example in the Anioma Civilization of an attempt to unite previously disunited states to resist the colonial army.
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Original:  You have seen that one crucial reason for Anioma  defeat was the great discrepancy of scale between the average Anioma community and the colonial army.
Revised:  You have seen that one crucial reason for Anioma 's defeat was the great discrepancy of scale between the average Anioma community and the colonial army.
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Original:  The British decided on a preemptive strike, and in December 1902 sent a powerful expedition which systematically destroyed a number of towns and imprisoned their leaders.
Revised:  The British decided on a preemptive strike, and in December 1902 sent a powerful expedition that systematically destroyed a number of towns and imprisoned their leaders.
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Original:  This time the changed their tactics, mistakenly, it would seem in retrospect, abandoning the united guerilla warfare of 1898 for the individual defence of each town.
Revised:  This time they changed their tactics, mistakenly, it would seem in retrospect, abandoning the united guerilla warfare of 1898 for the individual defence of each town.
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Original:  This time the changed their tactics, mistakenly, it would seem in retrospect, abandoning the united guerilla warfare of 1898 for the individual defence of each town.
Revised:  This time the changed their tactics, mistakenly, it would seem in retrospect, abandoning the united guerilla warfare of 1898 for the individual defense of each town.
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Original:  The British perceived, in the whole Asaba hinterland, a sympathy with the Ekumeku, and a disposition to throw off government authority.
Revised:  The British perceived, in the whole Asaba hinterland, sympathy with the Ekumeku, and a disposition to throw off government authority.
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Original:  In 1911, there was a final round-up of Ekumeku leaders in various towns that was followed, once more, by imprisonments.
Revised:  In 1911, there was a final round-up of Ekumeku leaders in various towns that were followed, once more, by imprisonments.
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Original:  The acting lieutenant-governor of the southern provinces sent an agitated telegram to Lagos: " Whole country is above area...is the state of rebellion."
Revised:  The acting lieutenant-governor of the southern provinces sent an agitated telegram to Lagos: " The whole country is above area...is the state of rebellion."
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Original:  Heroes included Dunkwu Isus of Onicha-Olona, Nwabuzo Iyogolo of Ogwashi-Ukwu, Awuno Ugbo, Obi of Akumazi, Agbambu Oshue of Igbuzo, Idabor of Issele-Azagba, Ochei Aghaeze of Onicha-Olona, Abuzu of Idumuje-Unor, Idegwu Otokpoike of Ubulu-Ukwu are still remembered in Anioma land  .
Revised:  Heroes included Dunkwu Isus of Onicha-Olona, Nwabuzo Iyogolo of Ogwashi-Ukwu, Awuno Ugbo, Obi of Akumazi, Agbambu Oshue of Igbuzo, Idabor of Issele-Azagba, Ochei Aghaeze of Onicha-Olona, Abuzu of Idumuje-Unor, Idegwu Otokpoike of Ubulu-Ukwu are still remembered in Anioma land and Igboland in general .
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Original:  All dives are followed by a Streamline just like Turn (sport)|turning .
Revised:  All dives are followed by a Streamline just like turning .
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Original: Diving is the action you do at the start of a swimming race , in most strokesyou jump off the diving blocks after you hear the starting signal but in Backstroke you start in the water.
Revised: A Dive start is the action you do at the start of a swimming race , in most strokesyou jump off the diving blocks after you hear the starting signal but in Backstroke you start in the water.
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Original: Diving is the action you do at the start of a swimming race , in most strokesyou jump off the diving blocks after you hear the starting signal but in Backstroke you start in the water.
Revised: Diving is the action begun at the start of a swimming race , in most strokesyou jump off the diving blocks after you hear the starting signal but in Backstroke you start in the water.
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Original: Diving is the action you do at the start of a swimming race , in most strokesyou jump off the diving blocks after you hear the starting signal but in Backstroke you start in the water.
Revised: Diving is the action you do at the start of a swimming race . In most strokes, the swimmer jumps off the diving blocks after you hear the starting signal but in Backstroke you start in the water.
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Original: Diving is the action you do at the start of a swimming race , in most strokesyou jump off the diving blocks after you hear the starting signal but in Backstroke you start in the water.
Revised: Diving is the action you do at the start of a swimming race , in most strokesyou jump off the diving blocks after hearing the starting signal but in Backstroke you start in the water.
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Original: Diving is the action you do at the start of a swimming race , in most strokesyou jump off the diving blocks after you hear the starting signal but in Backstroke you start in the water.
Revised: Diving is the action you do at the start of a swimming race , in most strokesyou jump off the diving blocks after you hear the starting signal . However it is performed using a backstroke, starting in the water.
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Original:  All dives are followed by a Streamline just like turning.
Revised:  All dives are followed by a streamline just like turning.
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Original:  However it is performed using a backstroke , starting in the water.
Revised:  However if it is a backstroke event, the swimmers will be starting in the water.
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Original:  9th century YearEvent860Naddoðr discovers Iceland.
Revised: Overview 9th century YearEvent860Naddoðr discovers Iceland.
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Original: 2021 The Kashmir Files 2019 The Tashkent Files as Aiysha Ali Shah 2017 Grahan as Rama 2017 Peshwa Bajirao as Tarabai 2016 Buddha in a Traffic Jam 2015-16 Meri Awaaz Hi Pehchaan Hai (TV series)
Revised: 2022 The Kashmir Files 2019 The Tashkent Files as Aiysha Ali Shah 2017 Grahan as Rama 2017 Peshwa Bajirao as Tarabai 2016 Buddha in a Traffic Jam 2015-16 Meri Awaaz Hi Pehchaan Hai (TV series)
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Original: Background Corridart was intended to be the principal arts and cultural component of the 1976 Summer Olympics , but was destroyed illegally on the direct order of the city's executive council, itself having been told to do so by then mayor Jean Drapeau .
Revised: Background Corridart was intended to be the principal arts and cultural component of the 1976 Summer Olympics .
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Original: Legacy Most of the works were destroyed beyond repair or recognition, leading to a legal battle that lasted for ten years and saw very little compensation awarded to the artists.
Revised:  Most of the works were destroyed beyond repair or recognition, leading to a legal battle that lasted for ten years and saw very little compensation awarded to the artists.
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Original: Canadian Art: interview with Melvin Charney  On July 1, 2001, the Leonard & Bina Ellen Art Gallery at Concordia University honoured Corridart by presenting an exhibition for the 25th anniversary of its destruction.
Revised: Canadian Art: interview with Melvin Charney Legacy On July 1, 2001, the Leonard & Bina Ellen Art Gallery at Concordia University honoured Corridart by presenting an exhibition for the 25th anniversary of its destruction.
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Original:  In a controversial decision, Mayor Jean Drapeau had the entire exhibit torn down on July 13, two days before the Olympic games began.
Revised:  In a controversial decision, Mayor Jean Drapeau had the entire exhibit torn down during the evening of July 13, two days before the Olympic games began.
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Original:  Ultimately the city and the artists settled  with an $85,000 payment made to the artists.
Revised:  Ultimately the city and the artists settled , with an $85,000 payment made to the artists.
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Original: Dismantling of the exhibition Unfortunately Corridart never officially opened to the public.
Revised: Dismantling of the exhibition Corridart never officially opened to the public.
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Original:  The total cost of the show in 1976 dollars for the project was a scant $386,000 (about $1.6 million in 2017 Canadian dollars), and it was considered an expensive mistake by city officials who ironically masterminded the most costly Olympiad of the 20th century .Canadian Art: interview with Melvin Charney
Revised:  The total cost of the show in 1976 dollars for the project was a scant $386,000 (about $1.6 million in 2017 Canadian dollars), and it was considered an expensive mistake by city officials .Canadian Art: interview with Melvin Charney
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Original:  He was the son of first Shobun Gotō and called as the second Shobun Gotō  .
Revised:  He was the son of first Shobun Gotō and was called the " second Shobun Gotō .
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Original:  He was the son of first Shobun Gotō and called as the second Shobun Gotō  .
Revised:  He was the son of first Shobun Gotō and called as the second Shobun Gotō " .
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Original: European Discovery (18th Century ) Dutch navigator Abel Tasman was the first known European visitor to Fiji, sighting the northern island of Vanua Levu and the North Taveuni archipelago in 1643.
Revised: European discovery (18th Century ) Dutch navigator Abel Tasman was the first known European visitor to Fiji, sighting the northern island of Vanua Levu and the North Taveuni archipelago in 1643.
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Original: European Discovery (18th Century ) Dutch navigator Abel Tasman was the first known European visitor to Fiji, sighting the northern island of Vanua Levu and the North Taveuni archipelago in 1643.
Revised: European Discovery (18th century ) Dutch navigator Abel Tasman was the first known European visitor to Fiji, sighting the northern island of Vanua Levu and the North Taveuni archipelago in 1643.
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Original:  It was not until 1789, however, that the islands were charted and plotted, when William Bligh, the castaway captain of the HMS Bounty , passed Ovalau and sailed between the main islands of Viti Levu and Vanua Levu en route to Batavia, in what is now Indonesia.
Revised:  It was not until 1789, however, that the islands were charted and plotted, when William Bligh, the castaway captain of , passed Ovalau and sailed between the main islands of Viti Levu and Vanua Levu en route to Batavia, in what is now Indonesia.
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Original:  Bligh Water, the strait between the two main islands, is named after him, and for a time, the Fiji Islands were known as the  Bligh Islands. 
Revised:  Bligh Water, the strait between the two main islands, is named after him, and for a time, the Fiji Islands were known as the " Bligh Islands. 
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Original:  Bligh Water, the strait between the two main islands, is named after him, and for a time, the Fiji Islands were known as the  Bligh Islands. 
Revised:  Bligh Water, the strait between the two main islands, is named after him, and for a time, the Fiji Islands were known as the Bligh Islands. "
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Original: Those were our gigantic(so called Lemurian but proto-Fijian ancestors)  who sailed around the world nd erected their ancient civilisation in more than 24 countries.
Revised: Those were our gigantic(so called Lemurian but proto-Fijian ancestors) forefathers who sailed around the world nd erected their ancient civilisation in more than 24 countries.
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Original:  Recent findings on Moturiki island showed that our verbal history has beaten the lies of overseas scholars..
Revised:  However,recent findings on Moturiki island showed that our verbal history has beaten the lies of overseas scholars..
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Original:  Recent findings on Moturiki island showed that our verbal history has beaten the lies of overseas scholars..
Revised:  Recent findings on Moturiki island showed that our verbal history had beaten the lies of overseas scholars..
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Original: Which   is a big petroglyphed stone encryption with 3 sets of concentric circles on its side nd 3 bowels engraved on top of it found on Korobaba piece of land next to Uluibau village pool,Moturiki..
Revised: Which There is a big petroglyphed stone encryption with 3 sets of concentric circles on its side nd 3 bowels engraved on top of it found on Korobaba piece of land next to Uluibau village pool,Moturiki..
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Original: Which   is a big petroglyphed stone encryption with 3 sets of concentric circles on its side nd 3 bowels engraved on top of it found on Korobaba piece of land next to Uluibau village pool,Moturiki..
Revised: Which is a big petroglyphed stone encrypted with 3 sets of concentric circles on its side nd 3 bowels engraved on top of it found on Korobaba piece of land next to Uluibau village pool,Moturiki..
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Original:  After gaining indepence the other Nordic countries adopted national flags of the same design, Iceland in 1915, Finland in 1917 and Faroe Islands in 1919.
Revised:  After gaining independence the other Nordic countries adopted national flags of the same design, Iceland in 1915, Finland in 1917 and Faroe Islands in 1919.
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Original: Georgia Teutonic Order Estonia Hungary Latvia Lithuania Germany Nordic flag designs very similar to Denmark's, Sweden's, and Norway's national flags were proposed as Germany's national flags in both 1919 and 1948, after World War I and World War II, respectively.
Revised: Brazil Teutonic Order Estonia Hungary Latvia Lithuania Germany Nordic flag designs very similar to Denmark's, Sweden's, and Norway's national flags were proposed as Germany's national flags in both 1919 and 1948, after World War I and World War II, respectively.
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Original: Georgia Teutonic Order Estonia Hungary Latvia Lithuania Germany Nordic flag designs very similar to Denmark's, Sweden's, and Norway's national flags were proposed as Germany's national flags in both 1919 and 1948, after World War I and World War II, respectively.
Revised: Georgia Estonia Hungary Latvia Lithuania Germany Nordic flag designs very similar to Denmark's, Sweden's, and Norway's national flags were proposed as Germany's national flags in both 1919 and 1948, after World War I and World War II, respectively.
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Original: Georgia Teutonic Order Estonia Hungary Latvia Lithuania Germany Nordic flag designs very similar to Denmark's, Sweden's, and Norway's national flags were proposed as Germany's national flags in both 1919 and 1948, after World War I and World War II, respectively.
Revised: Georgia Teutonic Order Estonia Georgia Latvia Lithuania Germany Nordic flag designs very similar to Denmark's, Sweden's, and Norway's national flags were proposed as Germany's national flags in both 1919 and 1948, after World War I and World War II, respectively.
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