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Original:  Also referred to as the "romanticist on the throne", he is best remembered for the many buildings he had constructed in Berlin and Potsdam , as well as for the completion of the Gothic Cologne Cathedral.
Revised:  Also referred to as the "romanticist on the throne", he is best remembered for the many buildings he had constructed in Berlin and Potsdam as well as for the completion of the Gothic Cologne Cathedral.
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Original:  The main forms of placentitis are: Villitis, inflammation of chorionic villi  Intervillositis, inflammation of the intervillous space.
Revised:  The main forms of placentitis are: Villitis, inflammation of chorionic villi . Intervillositis, inflammation of the intervillous space.
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Original:     Chronic histiocytic intervillositis Chronic Histiocytic Intervillositis (CHI or CHIV) also known as Chronic Intervillositis of Unknown (A)etiology (CIUE) and Massive Chronic Intervillositis (MCI) is defined as a diffuse infiltration of mononuclear cells (histiocytes, lymphocytes, monocytes) of maternal origin into the intervillous space within the placenta.
Revised: Villitis of unknown etiology Chronic histiocytic intervillositis Chronic Histiocytic Intervillositis (CHI or CHIV) also known as Chronic Intervillositis of Unknown (A)etiology (CIUE) and Massive Chronic Intervillositis (MCI) is defined as a diffuse infiltration of mononuclear cells (histiocytes, lymphocytes, monocytes) of maternal origin into the intervillous space within the placenta.
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Original:  For larger game such as elk or moose, 50+ lbs is suggested.
Revised:  For larger game such as elk or moose, more then is suggested.
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Original:  Most male American archers can draw a bow rated at 50-60 lbs , most women 30-40 lbs . Danish licensed bowhunters are required to complete a report every time that they kill a roe deer.
Revised:  Most male American archers can draw a bow rated at 50-60 lbs , most women . Danish licensed bowhunters are required to complete a report every time that they kill a roe deer.
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Original:  For 1999-2004 , these reports showed that 576 arrows were released at roe deer. 92.5\% of these shots resulted in a dead roe deer being collected by the hunter, and 2.6\% are documented as misses.
Revised:  For 1999–2004 , these reports showed that 576 arrows were released at roe deer. 92.5\% of these shots resulted in a dead roe deer being collected by the hunter, and 2.6\% are documented as misses.
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Original:  archers usually restrict shots to to .
Revised:  archers usually restrict shots to .
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Original:  The hunter may wait on a wooden or metal stand elevated in a tree, from three to six meters . Danish licensed bowhunters are required to complete a report every time that they kill a roe deer.
Revised:  The hunter may wait on a wooden or metal stand elevated in a tree, from . Danish licensed bowhunters are required to complete a report every time that they kill a roe deer.
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Original:  (To become a licensed bowhunter in Denmark it is necessary to pass a very demanding proficiency test, including a test of accuracy in which five of six arrows must hit within the vital area of game targets ranging from roe deer to pheasant in size at unknown distances up to 25 meters .
Revised:  (To become a licensed bowhunter in Denmark it is necessary to pass a very demanding proficiency test, including a test of accuracy in which five of six arrows must hit within the vital area of game targets ranging from roe deer to pheasant in size at unknown distances up to .
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Original: In "stand hunting," the hunter waits for game to come to him , usually near food, water, or known trails.
Revised: In "stand hunting," the hunter waits for game to come to them , usually near food, water, or known trails.
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Original: Europe Legal status of bowhunting in Europe with countries allowing bowhunting in green Nations including Denmark, France, Spain, Portugal, Italy, Hungary, Finland , Bulgaria and Slovenia use bow and arrow hunting as a hunting tool in modern game management.
Revised: Europe Legal status of bowhunting in Europe with countries allowing bowhunting in green Nations including Denmark, France, Spain, Portugal, Italy, Hungary, Finland and Bulgaria use bow and arrow hunting as a hunting tool in modern game management.
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Original:  Another study found that using a demanding action video game could be beneficial to basic processes such as spatial cognition and rapid perception but that using a non-action 3D puzzle game showed improvements that were not transferable from the game itself  Findings from these results vary according to which nontrained tasks the researcher chooses to use.
Revised:  Another study found that using a demanding action video game could be beneficial to basic processes such as spatial cognition and rapid perception but that using a non-action 3D puzzle game showed improvements that were not transferable from the game itself </ref> Findings from these results vary according to which nontrained tasks the researcher chooses to use.
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Original:  Another study found that using a demanding action video game could be beneficial to basic processes such as spatial cognition and rapid perception but that using a non-action 3D puzzle game showed improvements that were not transferable from the game itself </ref> Findings from these results vary according to which nontrained tasks the researcher chooses to use.
Revised:  Another study found that using a demanding action video game could be beneficial to basic processes such as spatial cognition and rapid perception but that using a non-action 3D puzzle game showed improvements that were not transferable from the game itself . Findings from these results vary according to which nontrained tasks the researcher chooses to use.
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Original:  History The concept of working memory became widely accepted and its importance better understood across the 1970s.
Revised: Along with reported decreases of inattentive behaviours, hyperactivity, and impulsivity in children with ADHD, a pilot study done on adults after experiencing a stroke found that systematic working memory training can improve working memory and attention. This study also contained a self-rating on symptoms of cognitive failures both before and after the study. Eight out of the nine participants that completed the study reported less cognitive failures occurring in the post-study rating compared to prior to the study. Overall, the pilot study concludes that working memory training in adult patients that have previously had a stroke can both improve their cognitive function as measured by neuropsychological tests as well as improvements in subjective reports of cognitive failures. History The concept of working memory became widely accepted and its importance better understood across the 1970s.
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Original:  Although some studies published have argued that working memory training has the ability to improve overall intelligence, more recent literature suggests that working memory training does not transfer to other cognitive ability tests.
Revised: Studies have also proven that working memory training can possibly help to improve deficits in working memory caused by anxiety and depression disorders, especially in adolescents. A trial study tested the WM of 733 adolescent participants, randomly assigning them to an active or placebo emotional working memory training. Emotional stimuli was used as the best way to see results because of the major influence anxiety and depression disorders have on emotional regulation. After 4 weeks of bi-weekly training, results showed improvements in working memory, both short-term and long-term emotional functioning, and even an increase in self esteem among the active group. While improvements in WM were observed in both groups, there were many limitations and further research is still needed to produce training that will create long term effects in those who suffer from mental health disorders such as anxiety and depression. Although some studies published have argued that working memory training has the ability to improve overall intelligence, more recent literature suggests that working memory training does not transfer to other cognitive ability tests.
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Original:  In 1908 , he continued on for training at the Imperial Japanese Army Academy, graduating from the 6th class with a specialty in artillery.
Revised:  In 1908 he continued his training at the Imperial Japanese Army Academy, graduating from the 6th class with a specialty in artillery.
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Original:  In 1908 , he continued on for training at the Imperial Japanese Army Academy, graduating from the 6th class with a specialty in artillery.
Revised:  In 1908 , he continued on for training at the Imperial Japanese Army Academy, graduating from the sixth class with a specialty in artillery.
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Original:  Zhao returned to China in 1909, subsequently serving under General Cai E and General Li Quanhong in Guangxi Province during the Xinhai Revolution  which overthrew the imperial government.
Revised:  Zhao returned to China in 1909, subsequently serving under Gen. Cai E and General Li Quanhong in Guangxi Province during the Xinhai Revolution which overthrew the imperial government.
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Original:  Zhao returned to China in 1909, subsequently serving under General Cai E and General Li Quanhong in Guangxi Province during the Xinhai Revolution  which overthrew the imperial government.
Revised:  Zhao returned to China in 1909, subsequently serving under General Cai E and Gen. Li Quanhong in Guangxi Province during the Xinhai Revolution which overthrew the imperial government.
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Original:  Zhao returned to China in 1909, subsequently serving under General Cai E and General Li Quanhong in Guangxi Province during the Xinhai Revolution  which overthrew the imperial government.
Revised:  Zhao returned to China in 1909, subsequently serving under General Cai E and General Li Quanhong in Guangxi Province during the Xinhai Revolution , which overthrew the imperial government.
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Original:  Afterwards , he was sentenced to ten years in prison, but was freed by Yuan in 1915 and Zhao was restored to his position as commander of the 1st Division of the Hunan Army in 1916.
Revised:  Afterwards he was sentenced to ten years in prison, but was freed by Yuan in 1915 and Zhao was restored to his position as commander of the 1st Division of the Hunan Army in 1916.
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Original:  Afterwards , he was sentenced to ten years in prison, but was freed by Yuan in 1915 and Zhao was restored to his position as commander of the 1st Division of the Hunan Army in 1916.
Revised:  Afterwards , he was sentenced to ten years in prison, but was freed by Yuan in 1915 and restored to his position as commander of the 1st Division of the Hunan Army in 1916.
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Original:  In 1922 , Zhao was made commander of the New Xiang Army of the Beiyang Government.
Revised:  In 1922 Zhao was made commander of the New Xiang Army of the Beiyang Government.
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Original:  He was also the civil governor at the same time  except between November 1920 and 6 April 1921.
Revised:  He was also the civil governor at the same time , except between November 1920 and 6 April 1921.
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Original: Mao Zedong, Editors: Stuart R. Schram, Nancy Jane Hodes, Mao's Road to Power: The pre-Marxist period, 1912-1920, M.E. Sharpe, (October 1992) After a conflict with Zhao  Tang Shengzhi was driven south into the arms of Chiang Kai-shek, who gave him command of the Eighth Route Army of the National Revolutionary Army.
Revised: Mao Zedong, Editors: Stuart R. Schram, Nancy Jane Hodes, Mao's Road to Power: The pre-Marxist period, 1912-1920, M.E. Sharpe, (October 1992) After a conflict with Zhao , Tang Shengzhi was driven south into the arms of Chiang Kai-shek, who gave him command of the Eighth Route Army of the National Revolutionary Army.
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Original:  On 11 March , Tang's troops had deposed Zhao and replaced him as the military and civil governor of Hunan as part of the opening campaign of the Northern Expedition.
Revised:  On 11 March Tang's troops had deposed Zhao and replaced him as the military and civil governor of Hunan as part of the opening campaign of the Northern Expedition.
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Original:  On 11 March , Tang's troops had deposed Zhao and replaced him as the military and civil governor of Hunan as part of the opening campaign of the Northern Expedition.
Revised:  On 11 March , Tang's troops deposed Zhao and replaced him as the military and civil governor of Hunan as part of the opening campaign of the Northern Expedition.
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Original:  He also implemented the Constitution of Hunan Province as a provincial constitution of Hunan.
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Original:  Nasiruddin Nasrat Shah gave refuge to the Afghan lords during the invasion of Babur though he remained neutral.
Revised:  Nasiruddin Nasrat Shah gave refuge to the Afghans during the invasion of Babur though he remained neutral.
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Original: The Hussain Shahi dynasty ruled from 1494 to 1538.
Revised: The Hussain Shahi dynasty (, ) was a family which ruled the late medieval Sunni Muslim Sultanate of Bengal from 1494 to 1538.
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Original: For a map of their territory see:  Alauddin Husain Shah,  considered as the greatest of all the sultans of Bengal for bringing a cultural renaissance during his reign.
Revised: For a map of their territory see: Alauddin Husain Shah, is considered as the greatest of all the sultans of Bengal for bringing a cultural renaissance during his reign.
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Original:  He conquered Kamarupa, Kamata, Jajnagar, and Orissa and extended the sultanate all the way to the port of Chittagong, which witnessed the arrival of the first Portuguese merchants.
Revised:  He conquered Kamrup and Orissa and extended the sultanate all the way to the port of Chittagong, which witnessed the arrival of the first Portuguese merchants.
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Original:  He conquered Kamarupa, Kamata, Jajnagar, and Orissa and extended the sultanate all the way to the port of Chittagong, which witnessed the arrival of the first Portuguese merchants.
Revised:  He conquered Kamarupa, Kamata, Jajnagar, and Orissa and extended the Sultanate all the way to the port of Chittagong, which witnessed the arrival of the first Portuguese merchants.
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Original:   Nasiruddin Nasrat Shah  gave refuge to the Afghans during the invasion of Babur though he remained neutral.
Revised:  Nasiruddin Nasrat Shah , gave refuge to the Afghans during the invasion of Babur though he remained neutral.
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Original:  However, Nasrat Shahmade a treaty with Babur and saved Bengal from a Mughal invasion.
Revised:  However, Nasrat Shahmade a treaty with Babur saved Bengal from a Mughal invasion.
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Original:  Eventually, the pashtun tribals broke through and sacked the capital in 1538 where they remained for several decades until the arrival of Mughal URL Rulers Alauddin Husain Shah (1494 –1519 ) Nasiruddin Nasrat Shah (1519 – 1533) Alauddin Firuz Shah (1533) Ghiyasuddin Mahmud Shah (1533 –1538 )
Revised:  Eventually, the pashtun tribals broke through and sacked the capital in 1538 where they remained for several decades until the arrival of Mughal URL Rulers Alauddin Husain Shah (1494 –1519 Sultan Nasir ad-Din Nasrat Shah1519 – 1533) Alauddin Firuz Shah (1533) Ghiyasuddin Mahmud Shah (1533 –1538 )
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Original:  Eventually, the Afghans broke through and sacked the capital in 1538 where they remained for several decades until the arrival of Mughal URL
Revised:  Eventually, the Afghans broke through and sacked the capital in 1538 where they remained for several decades until the arrival of Mughal dynasty.
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Original:  "Improvement" is conducted by altering external factors such as education and the controllable environment , including the prevention and removal of contagious disease and parasites, environmentalism, education regarding employment, home economics, sanitation, and housing.
Revised:  "Improvement" is conducted by altering external factors such as education and the controllable environments , including the prevention and removal of contagious disease and parasites, environmentalism, education regarding employment, home economics, sanitation, and housing.
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Original: Euthenics is the study of the improvement of human functioning and well-being by improvement of living conditions.
Revised: Euthenics is the study of improvement of human functioning and well-being by improvement of living conditions.
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Original: Origin of the term [[File:Ellen Swallow Richards.jpg|280px|Ellen Swallow Richards, the first female student and instructor at MIT]] The term was derived in the late 19th century from the Greek verb eutheneo, εὐθηνέω (eu, well;
Revised: Etymology [[File:Ellen Swallow Richards.jpg|280px|Ellen Swallow Richards, the first female student and instructor at MIT]] The term was derived in the late 19th century from the Greek verb eutheneo, εὐθηνέω (eu, well;
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Original: Euthenics  is the study of improvement of human functioning and well-being by improvement of living conditions.
Revised: Euthenics () is the study of improvement of human functioning and well-being by improvement of living conditions.
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Original:  However the lineage of that name is URL
Revised:  However the lineage of that name is questionable.
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Original: Rémi Benoît (January 3, 1842 – June 19, 1919) was a man of a number of vocations from D ’ Escousse, Nova Scotia.
Revised: Rémi Benoît (January 3, 1842 – June 19, 1919) was a man of a number of vocations from D ' Escousse, Nova Scotia.
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Original:  This culminated in 1902 with the formation of the Société l ’ Assomption, a mutual benefit society.
Revised:  This culminated in 1902 with the formation of the Société l ' Assomption, a mutual benefit society.
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Original:  Benoît should be remembered as someone who devoted much energy to Acadian causes and founding an institution that, in an altered form, has importance today.
Revised:  Benoît devoted much energy to Acadian causes and founding an institution that, in an altered form, has importance today.
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Original:  Benoît should be remembered as someone who devoted much energy to Acadian causes and founding an institution that, in an altered form, has importance today.
Revised:  Benoît should be remembered as someone who devoted much energy to Acadian causes and founding an institution that, in an altered form, still exists today.
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Original:  The phrase paintdancing, and other variations, was originally coined by Gloria M. Buono, author and illustrator of "The Painting Ballerina," more information at URL The concept of combining movement and painting originated during the later part of the American and European Modern art period.
Revised:  The concept of combining movement and painting originated during the later part of the American and European Modern art period.
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Original:  PaintDancing.com events support local food banks and other charitable organizations that contribute to the betterment of their communities, and the world.  ] 
Revised:  PaintDancing.com events support local food banks and other charitable organizations that contribute to the betterment of their communities, and the world. 1] 
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Original:  The phrases "paint dancing" and "paint dancer" and other variations were originally coined by Gloria M. Buono, author, illustrator and publisher of The Painting Ballerina URL
Revised:  The phrases "paint dancing" and "paint dancer" and other variations were originally coined by Gloria M. Buono, author, illustrator and publisher of The Painting Ballerina .
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Original:  Paint Dancers, using non-toxic paint, brushes and paper, attend organized events dressed in ready-to-paint and dance clothing.
Revised:  Paint Dancers, using paint, brushes and paper, attend organized events dressed in ready-to-paint and dance clothing.
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Original:  One of the more recent introductions of Paint Dancing to American culture is being popularized by a large grassroots movement created by internationally-acclaimed, abstract artist and hunger-awareness activist , Matt Jones.
Revised:  One of the more recent introductions of Paint Dancing to American culture is being popularized by a grassroots movement created by internationally-acclaimed, abstract artist and hunger-awareness activist , Matt Jones.
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Original:  One of the more recent introductions of Paint Dancing to American culture is being popularized by a large grassroots movement created by internationally-acclaimed, abstract artist and hunger-awareness activist , Matt Jones.
Revised:  One of the more recent introductions of Paint Dancing to American culture is being popularized by a large grassroots movement created by artist and activist Matt Jones.
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Original: In Chile meanwhile a new administration had been elected, of Domingo Santa María and she pushed for finish the costly war.
Revised: In Chile meanwhile a new administration had been elected, of Domingo Santa María and he pushed for finish the costly war.
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Original: The command of the Chilean Expeditionary Forces passed from Manuel Baquedano on to Cornelio Saavedra, then Pedro Lagos and finally to Patricio Lynch, who set down his military headquarters in the Government Palace of Peru in Lima.
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Original:  In mid-April the Chileans started the Ambrosio Letelier Expedition to defeat the last forces of Pierola, but after many losses the expedition came back to Limain early July, where Letelier and his officers were court martialed.
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Original: The occupation came to an end after the signing of the Treaty of Ancón , on October 23, 1883.
Revised: The occupation came to an end after the signing of the Treaty of Ancón on October 23, 1883.
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Original:  On 26 June 1881  the United States recognized President Calderón as President of Peru     .
Revised:  On 26 June 1881 , the United States recognized President Calderón as President of Peru .
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Original:  On 26 June 1881  the United States recognized President Calderón as President of Peru     .
Revised:  On 26 June 1881 the United States recognized President Calderón as President of Peru . .
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Original: Information on Off-label Use and Drug Economics The law abolishes the long-standing prohibition of broadcasting by manufacturers of information about unapproved uses of drugs and medical devices.
Revised: Information on off-label use and drug economics The law abolishes the long-standing prohibition of broadcasting by manufacturers of information about unapproved uses of drugs and medical devices.
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Original:  Pharmacy Compounding The act creates a special exemption to ensure continued availability of compounded drug products prepared by pharmacists to provide patients with individualized therapies not available commercially.
Revised:  Pharmacy compounding The act creates a special exemption to ensure continued availability of compounded drug products prepared by pharmacists to provide patients with individualized therapies not available commercially.
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Original:  Risk-based Regulation of Medical Devices The act complements and builds on the FDA's recent measures to focus its resources on medical devices that present the greatest risks to patients.
Revised:  Risk-based regulation of medical devices The act complements and builds on the FDA's recent measures to focus its resources on medical devices that present the greatest risks to patients.
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