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Original:  Today only a concrete marker remains . Jim Porter (as per Request on WikiProjectLouisville - All edit suggestions welcom 
Revised:  Today only a concrete marker remains . Jim Porter (as per Request on WikiProjectLouisville - All edit suggestions welcome 
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Original:  Porter stood 7 ’ 8 ” tall, weighed 300 pounds, had hands 13 ” long from the wrist to the tip of the middle finger and feet that were 14 ½ ” long (The Kentucky Encyclopedia).
Revised:  Porter stood 7 feet 8 ” tall, weighed 300 pounds, had hands 13 ” long from the wrist to the tip of the middle finger and feet that were 14 ½ ” long (The Kentucky Encyclopedia).
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Original:  Porter stood 7 ’ 8 ” tall, weighed 300 pounds, had hands 13 ” long from the wrist to the tip of the middle finger and feet that were 14 ½ ” long (The Kentucky Encyclopedia).
Revised:  Porter stood 7 ’ 8 inches tall, weighed 300 pounds, had hands 13 ” long from the wrist to the tip of the middle finger and feet that were 14 ½ ” long (The Kentucky Encyclopedia).
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Original:  Porter stood 7 ’ 8 ” tall, weighed 300 pounds, had hands 13 ” long from the wrist to the tip of the middle finger and feet that were 14 ½ ” long (The Kentucky Encyclopedia).
Revised:  Porter stood 7 ’ 8 ” tall, weighed 300 pounds, had hands 13 inches long from the wrist to the tip of the middle finger and feet that were 14 ½ ” long (The Kentucky Encyclopedia).
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Original:  Porter stood 7 ’ 8 ” tall, weighed 300 pounds, had hands 13 ” long from the wrist to the tip of the middle finger and feet that were 14 ½ ” long (The Kentucky Encyclopedia).
Revised:  Porter stood 7 ’ 8 ” tall, weighed 300 pounds, had hands 13 ” long from the wrist to the tip of the middle finger and feet that were 14 ½ inches long
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Original:  Their conclusion suggests that Porter had a hormone disorder called Acromegaly , which affects about 3 out of every 1 million people.
Revised:  Their conclusion suggests that Porter had a hormone disorder called acromegaly , which affects about 3 out of every 1 million people.
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Original:  Their conclusion suggests that Porter had a hormone disorder called Acromegaly , which affects about 3 out of every 1 million people.
Revised:  Their conclusion suggests that Porter had a hormone disorder called Acromegaly , which affects about three out of every 1 million people.
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Original:  Their conclusion suggests that Porter had a hormone disorder called Acromegaly , which affects about 3 out of every 1 million people.
Revised:  Their conclusion suggests that Porter had a hormone disorder called Acromegaly , which affects about 3 out of every one million people.
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Original:  Acromegaly or Gigantism is the result of a tumor (usually benign) pressing on the pituitary gland releasing an excessive amount of growth hormones.
Revised:  Acromegaly or gigantism is the result of a tumor (usually benign) pressing on the pituitary gland releasing an excessive amount of growth hormones.
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Original:  Early Life Born James D. Porter on December 15, 1811 in Portsmouth, OH Porter moved to Shippingport  with his family as an infant (Louisville Encyclopedia) where his father sought work at the Tarascon Mill.
Revised:  Early life Born James D. Porter on December 15, 1811 in Portsmouth, OH Porter moved to Shippingport with his family as an infant (Louisville Encyclopedia) where his father sought work at the Tarascon Mill.
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Original:  Early Life Born James D. Porter on December 15, 1811 in Portsmouth, OH Porter moved to Shippingport  with his family as an infant (Louisville Encyclopedia) where his father sought work at the Tarascon Mill.
Revised:  Early Life Born James D. Porter on December 15, 1811 in Portsmouth, Ohio, Porter moved to Shippingport with his family as an infant (Louisville Encyclopedia) where his father sought work at the Tarascon Mill.
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Original:  Early Life Born James D. Porter on December 15, 1811 in Portsmouth, OH Porter moved to Shippingport  with his family as an infant (Louisville Encyclopedia) where his father sought work at the Tarascon Mill.
Revised:  Early Life Born James D. Porter on December 15, 1811 in Portsmouth, OH Porter moved to Shippingport with his family as an infant where his father sought work at the Tarascon Mill.
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Original:  Porter began his rapid and visibly noticeable growth at age 17, sometimes growing as much as 1 inch in a week (Louisville Encyclopedia) .
Revised:  Porter began his rapid and visibly noticeable growth at age 17, sometimes growing as much as one inch in a week (Louisville Encyclopedia) .
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Original:  Porter began his rapid and visibly noticeable growth at age 17, sometimes growing as much as 1 inch in a week (Louisville Encyclopedia) .
Revised:  Porter began his rapid and visibly noticeable growth at age 17, sometimes growing as much as 1 inch in a week .
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Original:  By age 30  Porter had reached his full height and weight.
Revised:  By age 30 , Porter had reached his full height and weight.
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Original:  Print) According to his niece Mrs.
Revised:  Print) According to his niece 
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Original:  Lily Levi, “Not a chair was tall enough, not a bed was long enough, not a table was high enough ". Like any celebrity, Porter had a love-hate relationship with the public attention.
Revised:  Lily Levi, “Not a chair was tall enough, not a bed was long enough, not a table was high enough ." Like any celebrity, Porter had a love-hate relationship with the public attention.
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Original:  () Prospering early, he built a bigger tavern on Front Street in Shippingport.
Revised:  Prospering early, he built a bigger tavern on Front Street in Shippingport.
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Original:  (Triumph At The Falls - The Lou & Portland Canal)  The Big Gun Tavern was to be the grandest hotel in the South.
Revised:  (Triumph At The Falls - The Lou & Portland Canal) . The Big Gun Tavern was to be the grandest hotel in the South.
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Original:  It is believed that he died of heart disease as a complication of Acromelagy .
Revised:  It is believed that he died of heart disease as a complication of acromelagy .
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Original:  A special coffin 9 ’ long and 2 ’ wide at the breast was made for Porter and the rear doors had to be tied shut as the hearse lead a parade like a procession to Cave Hill Cemetery on April 28, 1859.
Revised:  A special coffin 9 feet long and 2 ’ wide at the breast was made for Porter and the rear doors had to be tied shut as the hearse lead a parade like a procession to Cave Hill Cemetery on April 28, 1859.
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Original:  A special coffin 9 ’ long and 2 ’ wide at the breast was made for Porter and the rear doors had to be tied shut as the hearse lead a parade like a procession to Cave Hill Cemetery on April 28, 1859.
Revised:  A special coffin 9 ’ long and 2 feet wide at the breast was made for Porter and the rear doors had to be tied shut as the hearse lead a parade like a procession to Cave Hill Cemetery on April 28, 1859.
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Original:  A special coffin 9 ’ long and 2 ’ wide at the breast was made for Porter and the rear doors had to be tied shut as the hearse lead a parade like a procession to Cave Hill Cemetery on April 28, 1859.
Revised:  A special coffin 9 ’ long and 2 ’ wide at the breastwas made for Porter and the rear doors had to be tied shut as the hearse lead a parade like a procession to Cave Hill Cemetery on April 28, 1859.
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Original:  Today only a concrete marker remains  Jim Porter (as per Request on WikiProjectLouisville - All edit suggestions welcome Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Living peop
Revised:  Today only a concrete marker remains . Jim Porter (as per Request on WikiProjectLouisville - All edit suggestions welcome Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Living peop
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Original:  Today only a concrete marker remains  Jim Porter (as per Request on WikiProjectLouisville - All edit suggestions welcome Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Living peop
Revised:  Today only a concrete marker remains Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Living peop
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Original:  (Triumph At The Falls - The Lou Portland Canal).
Revised:  Portland Canal).
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Original: On 11 May 2018, Google Doodle commemorated her 100th birthday.
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Original:  The Darpana Academy of Performing Arts celebrated its golden jubilee on 28 December 1998, with the announcement of the annual "Mrinalini Sarabhai Award for Classical Excellence", in the field of classical dance   .
Revised:  The Darpana Academy of Performing Arts celebrated its golden jubilee on 28 December 1998, with the announcement of the annual "Mrinalini Sarabhai Award for Classical Excellence", in the field of classical dance . .
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Original: Teachers of Indian classical dance Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:Indian female classical dancers Category:Indian women choreographers Category:Indian choreographers Category:Sarabhai family Category:Women educators from Kerala Category:20th-century Indian dancers Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian women artists Category:Women artists from Kerala Category:Educators from Kerala Category:20th-century women educato
Revised: Teachers of Indian classical dance Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:Indian female classical dancers Category:Indian women choreographers Category:Indian choreographers Category:Sarabhai family Category:Women educators from Kerala Category:20th-century Indian dancers Category:20th-century Indian educat
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Original:  Autoimmune diseases Autoimmune diseases are associated with Neoehrlichia mikurensis infection, and Borrelia miyamotoiinfection , and HIV, and the bacterium Mycobacterium tuberculosis.
Revised:  Autoimmune diseases Autoimmune diseases are associated with Neoehrlichia mikurensis infection, and Borrelia miyamotoi infection , and HIV, and the bacterium Mycobacterium tuberculosis.
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Original:  <ref> The Stomatophyta consist of the Bryophyta senso lato (Moss), and the Hemitracheophyta.
Revised:  The Stomatophyta consist of the Bryophyta senso lato (Moss), and the Hemitracheophyta.
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Original:  The Stomatophyta consist of the Bryophyta senso lato (Moss), and the Hemitracheophyta .
Revised:  The Stomatophyta consist of the Bryophyta (Moss), and the Hemitracheophyta .
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Original:  In 2021, Booth was also the only Fulbright Scholar awarded the Ivy Circle scholarship for her master's degree at Columbia University.
Revised:  Booth was also the only Fulbright Scholar awarded the Ivy Circle scholarship for her master's degree at Columbia University.
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Original:  Booth has interviewed many public figures and Hollywood celebrities, including Martin Luther King III and family, Pierce Brosnan , , Robin Wright, Khloé Kardashian, Prince Constantijn of The Netherlands, Victoria's Secret supermodel Behati Prinsloo Levine, Harry Potter star Domhnall Gleeson and Brian Gleeson, Neil Burger, Jeremy Piven, Tye Sheridan and more.
Revised:  Booth has interviewed many public figures and Hollywood celebrities, including Martin Luther King III and family, Pierce Brosnan , Robin Wright, Khloé Kardashian, Prince Constantijn of The Netherlands, Victoria's Secret supermodel Behati Prinsloo Levine, Harry Potter star Domhnall Gleeson and Brian Gleeson, Neil Burger, Jeremy Piven, Tye Sheridan and more.
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Original:  She was the first director of the Denver Commission on Human Relations and later the second Native American woman to become director of the National Congress of American Indians  .
Revised:  She was the first director of the Denver Commission on Human Relations . She was the second Native American woman to become director of the National Congress of American Indians .
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Original:  Paterson was hired to replace Frank George, who had in turn replaced Ruth Muskrat Bronson as executive director.
Revised:  Peterson was hired to replace Frank George, who had in turn replaced Ruth Muskrat Bronson as executive director.
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Original:  She created a model program for summer school programs on ethnic studies, which was used throughout the United States.
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Original:  In 2021, Yunus was awarded the Olympic Laurel, for his extensive work in sports for development. URL
Revised:  In 2021, Yunus was awarded the Olympic Laurel, for his extensive work in sports for development. 
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Original: Muhammad Yunus (born 28 June 1940) is a Bangladeshi social entrepreneur, banker, economist , and civil society leader who was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for founding the Grameen Bank and pioneering the concepts of microcredit and microfinance.
Revised: Muhammad Yunus (born 28 June 1940) is a Bangladeshi social entrepreneur, banker, economist and civil society leader who was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for founding the Grameen Bank and pioneering the concepts of microcredit and microfinance.
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Original:    He was born on 11 June 1894 at Porbandar, the second son of Seth Devkaran Nanjee.
Revised:  Birth He was born on 11 June 1894 at Porbandar, the second son of Seth Devkaran Nanjee.
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Original:    He was born on 11 June 1894 at Porbandar, the second son of Seth Devkaran Nanjee.
Revised:  Family life He was born on 11 June 1894 at Porbandar, the second son of Seth Devkaran Nanjee.
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Original: The Times of India Directory & Yearbook, Including Who's who,Sir Stanley Reed, Times of India, Bombay -1955 pg 1062  Pranlal Devkarn Nanjee was a founder of Devkaran Nanjee Banking Company (later renamed Dena Bank), Devkaran Nanjee Insurance Company and Devkaran Nanjee Investment Company based at Bombay.
Revised: The Times of India Directory & Yearbook, Including Who's who,Sir Stanley Reed, Times of India, Bombay -1955 pg 1062 Carrer Pranlal Devkarn Nanjee was a founder of Devkaran Nanjee Banking Company (later renamed Dena Bank), Devkaran Nanjee Insurance Company and Devkaran Nanjee Investment Company based at Bombay.
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Original:   He died on died in Bombay on 25 July 1956, aged 66. "Devkaran Nanjee dead", The Hindu (27 July 1956)  The Bharatiya Vidya Bhavan's The Bhavan's College of Communication and Management at Bombay was renamed as "Bhavan's Pranlal Devkaran Nanjee College of Mass Communication in year 1977 after the philanthropic trust founded by him donated a large amount of money for development of college.
Revised:  Death He died on died in Bombay on 25 July 1956, aged 66. "Devkaran Nanjee dead", The Hindu (27 July 1956) The Bharatiya Vidya Bhavan's The Bhavan's College of Communication and Management at Bombay was renamed as "Bhavan's Pranlal Devkaran Nanjee College of Mass Communication in year 1977 after the philanthropic trust founded by him donated a large amount of money for development of college.
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Original:  The new games also incorporate direct input from more than 120 teens and young adults with cancer across the U.S.
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Original:  This research informed HopeLab's development of the next version of Re-Mission currently underway.
Revised:  This research informed HopeLab's development of Re-Mission currently underway.
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Original: Re-Mission (Original Game) The original Re-Mission game was released in 2006 as a Microsoft Windows based third-person shooter based in the serious games genre.
Revised: Re-Mission The original Re-Mission game was released in 2006 as a Microsoft Windows based third-person shooter based in the serious games genre.
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Original:  Re-Mission 2 Re-Mission 2 is the follow-up to HopeLab’s Re-Mission video game , released in 2006.
Revised:  Re-Mission 2 Re-Mission 2 is the follow-up game released in 2006.
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Original:  The study enrolled 375 cancer patients aged 13–29 at 34 medical centers in the United States, Canada , and Australia.
Revised:  The study enrolled 375 cancer patients aged 13–29 at 34 medical centers in the United States, Canada and Australia.
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Original:  This research informed HopeLab's development of Re-Mission 2.  External links HopeLab main site Re-Mission main site supporting game orders and online community Re-Mission 2 main site supporting online game play Ruckus Nation idea competition main site Articles Videos Using a Mobile App to Fight Cancer, HUFFPOST Live, November 5, 2013 "Games for Health Keynote Speaker Steve W. Cole on ReMission"
Revised:  This research informed HopeLab's development of Re-Mission 2. External links HopeLab main site Re-Mission main site supporting game orders and online community Re-Mission 2 main site supporting online game play Ruckus Nation idea competition main site Articles and videos Using a Mobile App to Fight Cancer, HUFFPOST Live, November 5, 2013 "Games for Health Keynote Speaker Steve W. Cole on ReMission"
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Original:  Press Release (March 17, 2008) "F as in Fat: How Obesity Policies are Failing in America" Trust for America's Health (August 2007) "2005-2006 President's Cancer Panel report" References
Revised:  Press Release (March 17, 2008) "F as in Fat: How Obesity Policies are Failing in America" Trust for America's Health (August 2007) "2005-2006 President's Cancer Panel report" 
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Original:  HopeLab makes Re-Mission games available at no charge to young people with cancer and their families, as well as oncology healthcare workers and institutions around the world.
Revised:  HopeLab has made Re-Mission games available at no charge to young people with cancer and their families, as well as oncology healthcare workers and institutions around the world.
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Original: Re-Mission 2 Re-Mission 2 is the  follow-up game released in 2006.
Revised: Re-Mission 2 Re-Mission 2 is the follow-up to the original game.
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Original:  At the age of eighteen , she moved to Calgary to attend a Christian college.
Revised:  At the age of 18 , she moved to Calgary to attend a Christian college.
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Original:  Ryan believes that steal syndrome should not be apart of the AV fistula assessment.
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Original: Incidence DASS occurs in about 1\% of AV fistulas and 2.7-8\% of PTFE grafts.
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Original: In nephrology, vascular access steal syndrome or dialysis-associated steal syndrome (DASS) is a syndrome caused by ischemia (not enough blood flow) resulting from a vascular access device (such as an arteriovenous fistula or synthetic vascular graft–AV fistula) that was installed to provide access for the inflow and outflow of blood during hemodialysis.
Revised: In nephrology, vascular access steal syndrome is a syndrome caused by ischemia (not enough blood flow) resulting from a vascular access device (such as an arteriovenous fistula or synthetic vascular graft–AV fistula) that was installed to provide access for the inflow and outflow of blood during hemodialysis.
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Original:    Directors have included: Moussa Niakaté, 1964-circa 1974?
Revised:  Staff Directors have included: Moussa Niakaté, 1964-circa 1974?
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Original:  Aliou Ongoïba, circa 1992-2013 Seydou Diabaté, circa 2017 See also National Library of Mali (est. 1984) in French 
Revised:  Aliou Ongoïba, circa 1992-2013 Seydou Diabaté, circa 2017 See also National Library of Mali in French 
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Original:  30 April 1930 – 9 September 1985), was a three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy.
Revised:  I30 April 1930 – 9 September 1985), was a three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy.
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Original:  In 1970, Captain Zamir was made commanding officer of the Pakistan Marines , and joined the Eastern Command's headquarter in Dhaka .
Revised:  In 1970, Captain Zamir was made commanding officer of the Pakistan Marines .
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Original: After his matriculation in 1947, he was admitted and enrolled at the Delhi Technological University to study electrical engineering but made a transfer to Forman Christian College in Lahore where he did his pre-engineering courses after his family emigrated to Pakistan after the partition of India on 14 August 1947.
Revised: After his matriculation in 1947, he was admitted and enrolled at a technical college in Delhi to study electrical engineering but made a transfer to Forman Christian College in Lahore where he did his pre-engineering courses after his family emigrated to Pakistan after the partition of India on 14 August 1947.
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Original:  Prior to his death in 1985, he was serving as the Managing Director of Karachi Shipyard and Engineering from 1983 until 1985.
Revised:  Prior to his death in 1985, he was serving as the managing director of Karachi Shipyard and Engineering from 1983 until 1985.
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Original:  He was sent to United Kingdom where he attended the Britannia Naval College and graduated in electronics in 1954, upon returning, he was promoted as Sub-Lieutenant in the Navy.
Revised:  He was sent to the United Kingdom, where he attended the Britannia Naval College and graduated in electronics in 1954, upon returning, he was promoted as Sub-Lieutenant in the Navy.
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Original:  In 1979-81 , Rear-Admiral Zamir was appointed as a Commander Pakistan Fleet (COMPAK).
Revised:  In 1979–81 , Rear-Admiral Zamir was appointed as a Commander Pakistan Fleet (COMPAK).
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Original:  Vice-Admiral Ahmad served as the Secretary of Defence Production from 1981 until 1982 when he was appointed managing-director of Karachi Shipyard and Engineering which he remained until his death in 1985.
Revised:  Vice-Admiral Ahmad served as the Secretary of Defence Production from 1981 until 1982 when he was appointed managing director of Karachi Shipyard and Engineering which he remained until his death in 1985.
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Original:  Before the news was announced, Vice-Admiral Ahmad died of heart attack and Vice-Admiral Iftikhar Ahmed Sirohey was elevated as chief of naval staff.
Revised:  Before the news was announced, Vice-Admiral Ahmad died of a heart attack, and Vice-Admiral Iftikhar Ahmed Sirohey was elevated as chief of naval staff.
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Original: Vice-Admiral Ahmad Zamir ( Urdu:احمد ضمير 30;
Revised: Vice-Admiral Ahmad Zamir ( ; 30
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Original:  The Polish literary critic, theoretician as well as cultural historian discerned three kinds of space, namely, extratextual, intertextual and intratextual space .
Revised:  The Polish literary critic, theoretician as well as cultural historian discerned three kinds of space, namely, extratextual, intertextual and intratextual .
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Original:  The Polish literary critic derived three subspaces from the intratextual space: physical, symbolical and mathematical ones.
Revised:  Porębski derived three subspaces from the intratextual space: physical, symbolical and mathematical ones.
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Original: Approaches to literary space  The past approach Space in the 20th century was regarded as a part of various literary spheres, such as the narrative situation.
Revised: Approaches to literay space The past approach Space in the 20th century was regarded as a part of various literary spheres, such as the narrative situation.
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Original: Approaches to literary space  The past approach Space in the 20th century was regarded as a part of various literary spheres, such as the narrative situation.
Revised: Approaches to literary space = The past approach Space in the 20th century was regarded as a part of various literary spheres, such as the narrative situation.
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