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Original: The Franco–Hova Wars, also known as the Franco–Malagasy Wars were two French military interventions in Madagascar between 1883 and 1896 that overthrew the ruling monarchy of the Merina Kingdom, and resulted in Madagascar becoming a French colony.
Revised: The Franco-Hova Wars, also known as the Franco–Malagasy Wars were two French military interventions in Madagascar between 1883 and 1896 that overthrew the ruling monarchy of the Merina Kingdom, and resulted in Madagascar becoming a French colony.
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Original: The Franco–Hova Wars, also known as the Franco–Malagasy Wars were two French military interventions in Madagascar between 1883 and 1896 that overthrew the ruling monarchy of the Merina Kingdom, and resulted in Madagascar becoming a French colony.
Revised: The Franco–Hova Wars, also known as the Franco-Malagasy Wars were two French military interventions in Madagascar between 1883 and 1896 that overthrew the ruling monarchy of the Merina Kingdom, and resulted in Madagascar becoming a French colony.
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Original:  First Franco–Hova War France invaded Madagascar in 1883, in what became known as the first Franco–Hova War, seeking to restore the cancelled concessions.
Revised:  First Franco-Hova War France invaded Madagascar in 1883, in what became known as the first Franco–Hova War, seeking to restore the cancelled concessions.
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Original:  First Franco–Hova War France invaded Madagascar in 1883, in what became known as the first Franco–Hova War, seeking to restore the cancelled concessions.
Revised:  First Franco–Hova War France invaded Madagascar in 1883, in what became known as the first Franco-Hova War, seeking to restore the cancelled concessions.
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Original:  Second Franco–Hova War
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Original: Vijay Samuel Hazare (11 March 1915 – 18 December 2004) was an Indian cricket player from the state of Maharashtra .
Revised: Vijay Samuel Hazare (11 March 1915 – 18 December 2004) was an Indian cricketer .
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Original:  He captained the Indian cricket team in 14 matches between 1951 and 1953.
Revised:  He captained India in 14 matches between 1951 and 1953.
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Original:  Sevilla died on 11 October 2020 at the age of 89.
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Original: María del Carmen García Galisteo (born 16 October 1930  ), known professionally as Carmen Sevilla, was a Spanish actress, singer and television presenter.
Revised: María del Carmen García Galisteo (born October 16, 1930 ), known professionally as Carmen Sevilla, was a Spanish actress, singer and television presenter.
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Original: María del Carmen García Galisteo (born October 16, 1930 , died October 11, 2020 ), known professionally as Carmen Sevilla, was a Spanish actress, singer and television presenter.
Revised: María del Carmen García Galisteo (born October 16, 1930 ), known professionally as Carmen Sevilla, was a Spanish actress, singer and television presenter.
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Original: María del Carmen García Galisteo (born October 16, 1930), known professionally as Carmen Sevilla, was a Spanish actress, singer and television presenter.
Revised: María del Carmen García Galisteo (born October 16, 1930), known professionally as Carmen Sevilla, is a Spanish actress, singer and television presenter.
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Original: María del Carmen García Galisteo (born October 16 , 1930), known professionally as Carmen Sevilla, is a Spanish actress, singer and television presenter.
Revised: María del Carmen García Galisteo (born 16 , 1930), known professionally as Carmen Sevilla, is a Spanish actress, singer and television presenter.
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Original:  References Category:1930 births Category:Living people Category:Spanish film actresses Category:Spanish female singers Category:Spanish television presenters Category:People from Seville Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Women television presenters Category:20th-century Spanish actresses Category:20th-century Spanish singers Category:20th-century  women singe
Revised:  References Category:1930 births Category:Living people Category:Spanish film actresses Category:Spanish female singers Category:Spanish television presenters Category:People from Seville Category:People with Alzheimer's disease Category:Women television presenters Category:20th-century Spanish actresses Category:20th-century Spanish singers Category:20th-century Spanish women singe
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Original: 1912100px| 100px|BirdTurquoise-browed motmot1999100px|  ArtFernando Llort style Art100px|MusicXuc100px| National DishPupusa100px|FlowerYucca gigantea2003100px|TreeTabebuia rosea1939100px|UNESCO World Heritage SiteJoya de Cerén1993100px|Patron and National PersonificationMonumento al Divino Salvador del Mundo100px|
Revised: 1912100px| 100px|BirdTurquoise-browed motmot1999100px| ArtFernando Llort style Art100px|MusicXuc100px| DishPupusa100px|FlowerYucca gigantea2003100px|TreeTabebuia rosea1939100px|UNESCO World Heritage SiteJoya de Cerén1993100px|Patron and National PersonificationMonumento al Divino Salvador del Mundo100px|
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Original: The  number of indigenous people in El Salvador have been criticized by indigenous organizations and academics as too small and  accuse the government of denying the existence of indigenous Salvadorans in the country.
Revised: The number of indigenous people in El Salvador has been criticized by indigenous organizations and academics as too small and accuse the government of denying the existence of indigenous Salvadorans in the country.
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Original: The  number of indigenous people in El Salvador have been criticized by indigenous organizations and academics as too small and  accuse the government of denying the existence of indigenous Salvadorans in the country.
Revised: The number of indigenous people in El Salvador have been criticized by indigenous organizations and academics as too small and many accuse the government of denying the existence of indigenous Salvadorans in the country.
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Original:  The low numbers of indigenous people may be partly explained by historically high rates of old-world diseases, absorption into the mestizo population, as well as mass murder during the 1932 Salvadoran peasant uprising (or La Matanza) which saw (estimates of) up to 30,000 peasants killed in a short period of time.
Revised:  The low numbers of indigenous people may be partly explained by historically high rates of old-world diseases, absorption into the mestizo population, as well as mass murder during the 1932 Salvadoran peasant uprising (or La Matanza) . This massacre saw (estimates of) up to 30,000 peasants killed in a short period of time.
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Original: Gallery Other In the 2007 census, 0.7\% of the population was considered as "other".
Revised:  Other In the 2007 census, 0.7\% of the population was considered as "other".
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Original:  By 2017, the figured had risen to over 2.3 million.   
Revised:  By 2017, the figure had risen to over 2.3 million. 
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Original: Age regression in therapy is a technique in a psycho-therapeutic process that facilitates access to childhood memories, thoughts and feelings.
Revised: Age regression in therapy is a psycho-therapeutic process that facilitates access to childhood memories, thoughts and feelings.
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Original:  Age regression includes hypnotherapy, a process where patients move their focus to memories of an earlier stage of life in order to explore these memories or to get in touch with some difficult-to-access aspects of their personality.
Revised:  Age regression can be induced by hypnotherapy, a process where patients move their focus to memories of an earlier stage of life in order to explore these memories or to get in touch with some difficult-to-access aspects of their personality.
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Original:  Age regression includes hypnotherapy, a process where patients move their focus to memories of an earlier stage of life in order to explore these memories or to get in touch with some difficult-to-access aspects of their personality.
Revised:  Age regression includes hypnotherapy, a process where patients move their focus to memories of an earlier stage of life in order to explore these memories or to access difficult aspects of their personality.
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Original:  Age regression has become quite controversial inside and outside the therapeutic community, with many cases involving alleged child abuse and other traumatic incidents subsequently being discredited.
Revised:  Age regression has become controversial inside and outside the therapeutic community, with many cases involving alleged child abuse and other traumatic incidents subsequently being discredited.
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Original:  Many of these techniques are intensely physical and confrontational and include forced holding and eye contact, sometimes while being required to access traumatic memories of past neglect or abuse or while being made to experience extreme emotions such as rage or fear  .
Revised:  Many of these techniques are intensely physical and confrontational and include forced holding and eye contact, sometimes while being required to access traumatic memories of past neglect or abuse . Extreme emotions such as rage or fear .
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Original:  If the hypnotherapist suggests that the patient is of a certain age, the patient may begin to appear to talk, act, and think according to that age.
Revised:  If the hypnotherapist suggests that the patient is of a certain age, the patient may begin to appear to talk, act, and think in ways appropriate to that age.
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Original: A study by Joseph Green,  professor at Ohio University, involved  48 students that were found to be highly susceptible to hypnosis .
Revised:  Joseph Green, professor at Ohio University, involved 48 students that were found to be highly susceptible to hypnosis .
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Original: A study by Joseph Green,  professor at Ohio University, involved  48 students that were found to be highly susceptible to hypnosis .
Revised: A study by Joseph Green, a professor at Ohio University, involved 48 students that were found to be highly susceptible to hypnosis .
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Original: A study by Joseph Green,  professor at Ohio University, involved  48 students that were found to be highly susceptible to hypnosis .
Revised: A study by Joseph Green, professor at Ohio University, involved 48 student who had been shown to be highly susceptible to hypnosis .
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Original:  The group of 48 students was divided into two separate groups.
Revised:  The group of 48 students was divided into two groups. Before they were hypnotized,
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Original:  32 of the students were informed prior to the hypnosis that hypnosis could lead to false memories and could not help people remember events that they could not ordinarily remember.
Revised:  32 of the students were warned that hypnosis could lead to false memories and could not help people remember events that they could not ordinarily remember.
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Original:  32 of the students were informed prior to the hypnosis that hypnosis could lead to false memories and could not help people remember events that they could not ordinarily remember.
Revised:  32 of the students were informed prior to the hypnosis that hypnosis could lead to false memories and could not make people remember things that they would not ordinarily remember.
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Original:  The other 16 students were not given any similar information .
Revised:  The remaining 16 students were not given any similar information .
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Original:  The other 16 students were not given any similar information .
Revised:  The other 16 students were not given such a warning .
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Original:  The students were asked about an uneventful night during their week , where they experienced uninterrupted sleep, uninfluenced by alcohol or other drugs , and inability to recall dreams .
Revised:  Then the students were asked about an uneventful night during their week , where they experienced uninterrupted sleep, uninfluenced by alcohol or other drugs , and inability to recall dreams .
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Original:  The students were asked about an uneventful night during their week , where they experienced uninterrupted sleep, uninfluenced by alcohol or other drugs , and inability to recall dreams .
Revised:  The students were asked to select an uneventful night during their week , where they experienced uninterrupted sleep, uninfluenced by alcohol or other drugs , and inability to recall dreams .
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Original:  The students were asked about an uneventful night during their week , where they experienced uninterrupted sleep, uninfluenced by alcohol or other drugs , and inability to recall dreams .
Revised:  The students were asked about an uneventful night from the previous week -- a night they had uninterrupted sleep, uninfluenced by alcohol or other drugs , and inability to recall dreams .
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Original:  While the students were placed under hypnosis, they were told that they had heard a loud noise at 4 a.m.
Revised:  While the students were asked if they had heard a loud noise at 4 a.m.
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Original:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories.  
Revised:  After hypnosis, they were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories. 
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Original:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories.  
Revised:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they recalled hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories. 
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Original:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories.  
Revised:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 percent of those who were not warned about false memories claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories. 
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Original:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories.  
Revised:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories. 
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Original:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories.  
Revised:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. such a noise. ''The results suggest that warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories. 
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Original:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories.  
Revised:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, '' Dr. Green said, adding, ''Warnings did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories. 
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Original:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories.  
Revised:  After hypnosis, the students were asked if they remembered hearing a loud noise at 4 a.m. 28\% of the informed students and 44 \% of the uninformed students claimed that they had heard a loud noiseat 4 a. m. Green found that the " warnings are helpful to some extent in discouraging pseudomemories, but did not prevent pseudomemories and did not reduce the confidence subjects had in those memories. '' 
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Original:  In the study, 48 student who had been shown to be highly susceptible to hypnosis were divided into two groups.
Revised:  In the study, 48 students who had been shown to be highly susceptible to hypnosis were divided into two groups.
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Original:  He 's believed to have died in Pointe-Noire in August 2000.
Revised:  He was believed to have died in Pointe-Noire in August 2000.
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Original: Indictment against BizimanaMECHANISM PROSECUTOR SERGE BRAMMERTZ CONFIRMS THE DEATH OF FUGITIVE AUGUSTIN   UR
Revised: Indictment against BizimanaMECHANISM PROSECUTOR SERGE BRAMMERTZ CONFIRMS THE DEATH OF FUGITIVE AUGUSTIN URL UR
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Original: Indictment against BizimanaMECHANISM PROSECUTOR SERGE BRAMMERTZ CONFIRMS THE DEATH OF FUGITIVE AUGUSTIN URL The Bizimana death constitutes a "great disappointment" for the survivors of the genocide, reacted Alain Gauthier, head of an association of victims of genocides in UR
Revised: Indictment against BizimanaMECHANISM PROSECUTOR SERGE BRAMMERTZ CONFIRMS THE DEATH OF FUGITIVE AUGUSTIN URL The Bizimana death constitutes a "great disappointment" for the survivors of the genocide, reacted Alain Gauthier, head of an association of victims of genocides in France
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Original: McGrath, 'The Brigade,' p.166 Later, however, the commander of the Panama Canal Department, Major General Preston Brown,  determined that the defense of Panama would be better served by command groups representing the Atlantic and the Pacific.
Revised: McGrath, 'The Brigade,' p.166 The commander of the Panama Canal Department, Major General Preston Brown, determined that the defense of Panama would be better served by command groups representing the Atlantic and the Pacific.
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Original:  Gastroenterological societies World Gastroenterology Organisation British Society of Gastroenterology United European Gastroenterology United States   In the United States, gastroenterology is an internal medicine subspecialty certified by the American Board of Internal Medicine (ABIM) and the American Osteopathic Board of Internal Medicine (AOBIM).
Revised:  Gastroenterological societies World Gastroenterology Organisation British Society of Gastroenterology United European Gastroenterology United States Training In the United States, gastroenterology is an internal medicine subspecialty certified by the American Board of Internal Medicine (ABIM) and the American Osteopathic Board of Internal Medicine (AOBIM).
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Original: Fertility preservation is the effort to help cancer patients retain their fertility, or ability to procreate.
Revised: Fertility preservation is the effort to help cancer retain their fertility, or ability to procreate.
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Original:  Research into how cancer affects reproductive health and preservation options are growing , sparked in part by the increase in the survival rate of cancer patients.
Revised:  Research into how cancer affects reproductive health and preservation options are growing . Specifically sparked in part by the increase in the survival rate of cancer patients.
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Original:  Indications Fertility preservation procedures are indicated when it is predicted that there will be exposure to a cause of infertility, mainly cancer treatment  . Cancer treatment Chemotherapy and radiation treatments for cancer and other serious illnesses can affect reproductive health.
Revised:  Indications Fertility preservation procedures are indicated when it is predicted that there will be exposure to a cause of infertility, mainly cancer treatment . Cancer treatment Chemotherapy and radiation treatments for cancer and autoimmunity conditions like Lupus and Multiple Sclerosis have the ability to affect reproductive health.
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Original:  many men and women , however, do not regain fertility after cancer treatment.
Revised:  many men and females , however, do not regain fertility after cancer treatment.
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Original:  Patients undergoing serious radiation, chemotherapy , or surgery sometimes experience symptoms resembling menopause (in women ) or andropause (in men), which  indicate reproductive damage.
Revised:  Patients undergoing serious radiation, chemotherapy , or surgery sometimes experience symptoms resembling menopause (in females ) or andropause (in men), which indicate reproductive damage.
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Original:  Patients undergoing serious radiation, chemotherapy , or surgery sometimes experience symptoms resembling menopause (in women ) or andropause (in men), which  indicate reproductive damage.
Revised:  Patients undergoing serious radiation, chemotherapy , or surgery sometimes experience symptoms resembling menopause (in women ) or andropause (in men), which can indicate reproductive damage.
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