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Original:   Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor  , cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said about him
Revised:  " Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor , cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said about him
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Original:   Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor  , cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said about him
Revised:  Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor " , cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said about him
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Original:  One of the most popular Russian theatrical and cinema actors, Oleg Yankovsky, died at the age of 65 on Wednesday.
Revised: Oleg Yankovsky One of the most popular Russian theatrical and cinema actors, Oleg Yankovsky, died at the age of 65 on Wednesday.
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Original: He left behind his widow, an actress Lyudmila Zorina, and his son Philip, who is also an actor and a film director.
Revised: He is survived by his widow, an actress Lyudmila Zorina, and his son Philip, who is also an actor and a film director.
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Original: He left behind his widow, an actress Lyudmila Zorina, and his son Philip, who is also an actor and a film director.
Revised: He left behind his widow, the actress Lyudmila Zorina, and his son Philip, who is also an actor and a film director.
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Original:  "Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor ", cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said about him
Revised:  "Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor ," cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said about him
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Original:  "Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor ", cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said about him
Revised:  "Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor ", cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said 
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Original:  "Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor," cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said  
Revised:  "Oleg Yankovsky was a heaven-born actor," cinematologist Kirill Razlogov said . 
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Original: The nuclear reactor at Chalk River, Ontario  was shut down Thursday, May 14 by the Atomic Energy of Canada Limited (AECL) due to a leak of Heavy water.
Revised: The nuclear reactor at Chalk River, Ontario in Canada was shut down Thursday, May 14 by the Atomic Energy of Canada Limited (AECL) due to a leak of Heavy water.
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Original:  [[File:Chalk River Labratories.jpg| upChalk River Labs seen from the Ottawa River ]] "The government of Canada is engaging international isotope producers as well as companies such as MDS Nordion, Lantheus, and Covidien, who all play key roles in securing medical isotope supply for North America," said Natural Resources Minister Lisa Raitt and Health Minister Leona Aglukkaq.
Revised:  [[File:Chalk River Labratories.jpg| upChalk River Labs seen from the Ottawa River ]] "The government of Canada is engaging international isotope producers as well as companies such as MDS Nordion, Lantheus, and Covidien, who all play key roles in securing medical isotope supply for North America," said Raitt and Health Minister Leona Aglukkaq.
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Original: The nuclear reactor at Chalk River, Ontario in Canada was shut down Thursday, May 14 by the Atomic Energy of Canada Limited (AECL) due to a leak of Heavy water.
Revised: The nuclear reactor at Chalk River, Ontario in Canada was shut down Thursday, May 14 by the Atomic Energy of Canada Limited (AECL) due to a leak of heavy water.
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Original: The nuclear reactor at Chalk River, Ontario in Canada was shut down  Thursday, May 14 by the Atomic Energy of Canada Limited (AECL) due to a leak of heavy water.
Revised: The nuclear reactor at Chalk River, Ontario in Canada was shut down on Thursday, May 14 by the Atomic Energy of Canada Limited (AECL) due to a leak of heavy water.
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Original:  When radioactive isotopes are injected into the body  radiologists can view higher radiation via medical imaging which enables them to make a more accurate diagnoses . Estimates are that the reactor will be shut down for approximately one month for repairs.
Revised:  When radioactive isotopes are injected into the body , radiologists can view higher radiation via medical imaging which enables them to make a more accurate diagnoses . Estimates are that the reactor will be shut down for approximately one month for repairs.
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Original:  When radioactive isotopes are injected into the body  radiologists can view higher radiation via medical imaging which enables them to make a more accurate diagnoses . Estimates are that the reactor will be shut down for approximately one month for repairs.
Revised:  When radioactive isotopes are injected into the body radiologists can view higher radiation via medical imaging , enabling them to make a more accurate diagnoses . Estimates are that the reactor will be shut down for approximately one month for repairs.
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Original:  When radioactive isotopes are injected into the body  radiologists can view higher radiation via medical imaging which enables them to make a more accurate diagnoses . Estimates are that the reactor will be shut down for approximately one month for repairs.
Revised:  When radioactive isotopes are injected into the body radiologists can view higher radiation via medical imaging which enables them to make a more accurate diagnosis . Estimates are that the reactor will be shut down for approximately one month for repairs.
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Original:  When radioactive isotopes are injected into the body  radiologists can view higher radiation via medical imaging which enables them to make a more accurate diagnoses . Estimates are that the reactor will be shut down for approximately one month for repairs.
Revised:  When radioactive isotopes are injected into the body radiologists can view higher radiation via medical imaging which enables them to make a more accurate diagnoses . Estimates suggest that the reactor will be shut down for approximately one month for repairs.
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Original:  In December of 2007, the 52-year-old reactor was shut down and the Canadian House of Common stepped in to restart the reactor
Revised:  In December 2007, the 52-year-old reactor was shut down and the Canadian House of Common stepped in to restart the reactor
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Original: Sheriff Rich Hoffman said that there was a country-wide search across America for Colleen Hauser and her thirteen-year-old son Daniel who has Hodgkin's lymphoma after the pair fled a court order for chemotherapy.
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Original:  The judge said Daniel should be cared for in a foster home because the parents, Colleen and Anthony Hauser, medically neglected their son Daniel Hauser refusing chemotherapy after only one treatment.
Revised:  The judge said Daniel should be cared for in a foster home because the parents, Colleen and Anthony Hauser, medically neglected their son by refusing chemotherapy after only one treatment.
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Original:  Landis had previously cured his own cancer by administering himself with the Chaga Mushroom.
Revised:  Landis claims to have previously cured his own cancer by administering himself with the Chaga Mushroom.
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Original:  He, too fled chemotherapy as a teenager in 1994 and  cured it with natural remedies  . "I just want to help this kid.
Revised:  He, too fled chemotherapy as a teenager in 1994 and claims to have cured it with natural remedies . "I just want to help this kid.
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Original:  He's a nice kid, the family's nice, and they love him, and they want him to live," Best said   .
Revised:  He's a nice kid, the family's nice, and they love him, and they want him to live," Best said . .
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Original:  The president announced this at a campaign speech in Semnan. "... we launched a Sejil-2 missile, which is a two-stage missile and it has reached the intended target," Ahmadinejad said in the northern city which is close to the launch site    
Revised:  The president announced this at a campaign speech in Semnan. "... we launched a Sejil-2 missile, which is a two-stage missile and it has reached the intended target," Ahmadinejad said in the northern city which is close to the launch site . 
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Original: United States Defense Secretary Robert Gates confirmed the launch and stated that the missile has a range of 2,000 to 2,500 kilometers (1,200 to 1,500 miles).
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Original: '" "It hit the target exactly," added Ahmadinejad  
Revised: '" "It hit the target exactly," added Ahmadinejad . 
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Original:  Whether it hit the target that it was intended for, I have not seen any information on that.  
Revised:  Whether it hit the target that it was intended for, I have not seen any information on that. " 
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Original:  NYC Mayor Michael Bloomberg Both the car bombs and the missiles were bogus devices given to the plotters with the help of an informant for the FBI, who posed as a Pakistani militant affiliated with Al-Qaeda.
Revised:  NYC Mayor Michael Bloomberg Both the car bombs and the missiles were actually fakes given to the plotters with the help of an informant for the FBI, who posed as a Pakistani militant affiliated with Al-Qaeda.
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Original:  Simply, there is none." "This is no Cold War" ...
Revised:  Simply, there is none." ...
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Original:  Simply, there is none." "This is no Cold War" ...
Revised:  Simply, there is none." "This is no Cold War" 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Excerpts "This Task Force concludes that U.S. strategic communication must be transformed.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "This Task Force concludes that U.S. strategic communication must be transformed.
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Original:  Inevitably therefore, whatever Americans do and say only serves the party that has both the message and the "loud and clear" channel: the enemy." - pp. 40-41 Chapter 3 – Leveraging the Private Sector I'm going to highlight the points from section 3 so you can get an idea whether you want to use them or not. jkrusky 23:49, 8 Dec 2004 (UTC)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By contrast, our current strategic communication planning and execution is mired in diplomatic and marketing yesteryear.
Revised:  Inevitably therefore, whatever Americans do and say only serves the party that has both the message and the "loud and clear" channel: the enemy." - pp. 40-41 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By contrast, our current strategic communication planning and execution is mired in diplomatic and marketing yesteryear.
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Original:  and those tactics no longer work even in private sector marketing. p. 56 To develop a more effective strategic communication effort "we must give up the assumed advantages of the “incumbent” and trade them for the real edge of the “insurgent” in the information age."
Revised:  and those tactics no longer work even in private sector marketing. p. 56 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Incumbents" tend today to be bloated, slow, cautious, bureaucratic, change-resistant and more likely to play “defense” than “offense” to maintain power.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2. We must communicate what our definition for the future promises on individual terms, not national or pan-national religious terms.
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Original:  As a result, adjustments must be made and those responsible for implementation held accountable. p. 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mobilize greater private sector initiatives that contain a built-in agility, credibility and even deniability that will be missing from government-sponsored initiatives. p. 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% One reason the U.S. has had difficulty managing the post-war occupation of Iraq is a near total confusion over objectives and strategies.
Revised:  As a result, adjustments must be made and those responsible for implementation held accountable. p. 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% One reason the U.S. has had difficulty managing the post-war occupation of Iraq is a near total confusion over objectives and strategies.
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Original:  Similarly, in terms of U.S. strategic communication, a critical step in planning will be to detail exactly the destination toward which we must head. p. 53%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Lots of blather follows on specific marketing techniques that will help develop the U.S. "brand"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Chapter 4 – Strategic Communication: Direction, Coordination, Support, and Execution%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% I skimmed it real quick.
Revised:  Similarly, in terms of U.S. strategic communication, a critical step in planning will be to detail exactly the destination toward which we must head. p. 53%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Chapter 4 – Strategic Communication: Direction, Coordination, Support, and Execution%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% I skimmed it real quick.
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Original:  Similarly, in terms of U.S. strategic communication, a critical step in planning will be to detail exactly the destination toward which we must head. p. 53%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Lots of blather follows on specific marketing techniques that will help develop the U.S. "brand"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Chapter 4 – Strategic Communication: Direction, Coordination, Support, and Execution%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% I skimmed it real quick.
Revised:  Similarly, in terms of U.S. strategic communication, a critical step in planning will be to detail exactly the destination toward which we must head. p. 53%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Lots of blather follows on specific marketing techniques that will help develop the U.S. "brand"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% I skimmed it real quick.
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Original: December 20, 2004 WASHINGTON, D.C. - A U.S. Department of Defense advisory committee has released a report harshly criticizing the war on terror.
Revised:  WASHINGTON, D.C. - A U.S. Department of Defense advisory committee has released a report harshly criticizing the war on terror.
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Original: December 20, 2004 WASHINGTON, D.C. - A U.S. Department of Defense advisory committee has released a report harshly criticizing the war on terror.
Revised: December 20, 2004 A U.S. Department of Defense advisory committee has released a report harshly criticizing the war on terror.
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Original: A U.S. Department of Defense advisory committee has released a report harshly criticizing the war on terror .
Revised: A U.S. Department of Defense advisory committee has released a report harshly criticizing the U.S.-led "War on Terror" .
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Original:  The report by Defense Science Board was released without publicity the Wednesday before Thanksgiving .
Revised:  The report released without publicity the Wednesday before Thanksgiving .
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Original:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's "  negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as  "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . "  It continues , "The information campaign -
Revised:  It asserts this failure of " negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . " It continues , "The information campaign -
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Original:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's "  negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as  "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . "  It continues , "The information campaign -
Revised:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's " negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . " It continues , "The information campaign -
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Original:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's "  negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as  "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . "  It continues , "The information campaign -
Revised:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's " negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest in numerous ways. "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . " It continues , "The information campaign -
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Original:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's "  negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as  "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . "  It continues , "The information campaign -
Revised:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's " negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power " It continues , "The information campaign -
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Original:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's "  negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as  "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . "  It continues , "The information campaign -
Revised:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's " negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . " . It continues , "The information campaign -
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Original:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's "  negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as  "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . "  It continues , "The information campaign -
Revised:  It asserts this communication failure contributes to America's " negative image in world opinion and diminished ability to persuade , " and that this atmosphere of hostility can manifest itself in ways such as "terrorism, thin coalitions, harmful effects on business, restrictions on travel, declines in cross border tourism and education flows, and damaging consequences for other elements of U.S. soft power . " According to the report , "The information campaign -
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Original:  For example, it points out a significant drop in Arab support for the U.S. in the past couple years , according to a June 2004 Zogby poll: But it goes even further , charging that, "American direct intervention in the Muslim World has paradoxically elevated the stature of and support for radical Islamists."
Revised:  For example, it points out a significant drop in Arab support for the U.S. in the past couple years , according to a June 2004 Zogby poll: The report further claims, "American direct intervention in the Muslim World has paradoxically elevated the stature of and support for radical Islamists."
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Original:  " They hate our policies, not our freedom " So why has support for the U.S. dropped to the single digits in some Arab nations ? Some have put forth the claim that America is hated for its freedom.
Revised:  " They hate our policies, not our freedom '. So why has support for the U.S. dropped to the single digits in some Arab nations ? Some have put forth the claim that America is hated for its freedom.
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Original:  " They hate our policies, not our freedom " So why has support for the U.S. dropped to the single digits in some Arab nations ? Some have put forth the claim that America is hated for its freedom.
Revised:  " They hate our policies, not our freedom " So why has support for the U.S. dropped ? -- to single digits in some Arab nations ? Some have put forth the claim that America is hated for its freedom.
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Original:  " They hate our policies, not our freedom " So why has support for the U.S. dropped to the single digits in some Arab nations ? Some have put forth the claim that America is hated for its freedom.
Revised:  " They hate our policies, not our freedom " So why has support for the U.S. dropped to the single digits in some Arab nations . President Bush and others have famously claimed that America is hated for its freedom.
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Original:  From the same Zogby study: This study shows that while support for American values may not be overwhelming, it is practically non-existant for America's policies in the Middle East.
Revised:  From the same Zogby study: This study explains that while support for American values may not be overwhelming, it is practically non-existant for America's policies in the Middle East.
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Original:  The report goes on to explain, "The overwhelming majority voice their objections to what they see as one-sided support in favor of Israel and against Palestinian rights, and the longstanding, even increasing support for what Muslims collectively see as tyrannies, most notably Egypt, Saudi Arabia, Jordan, Pakistan, and the Gulf states.
Revised:  "The overwhelming majority voice their objections to what they see as one-sided support in favor of Israel and against Palestinian rights, and the longstanding, even increasing support for what Muslims collectively see as tyrannies, most notably Egypt, Saudi Arabia, Jordan, Pakistan, and the Gulf states.
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Original:  It concludes from this that the fundemental problem with relations with the Muslim world is not a simple matter of crafting the right message.
Revised:  It concludes from this that the fundamental problem with relations with the Muslim world is not a simple matter of crafting the right message.
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