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Original:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . Bursting onto the scene in 2006 with a sexy prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style , Tesla was something completely different from the conservative four-door sedan prototypes big-name automakers had offered in the past.
Revised:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . The vehicle first come into the automobile scene in 2006 with a sexy prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style , Tesla was something completely different from the conservative four-door sedan prototypes big-name automakers had offered in the past.
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Original:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . Bursting onto the scene in 2006 with a sexy prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style , Tesla was something completely different from the conservative four-door sedan prototypes big-name automakers had offered in the past.
Revised:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . Bursting onto the scene in 2006 with a prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style , Tesla was something completely different from the conservative four-door sedan prototypes big-name automakers had offered in the past.
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Original:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . Bursting onto the scene in 2006 with a sexy prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style , Tesla was something completely different from the conservative four-door sedan prototypes big-name automakers had offered in the past.
Revised:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . Bursting onto the scene in 2006 with a sexy prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style . Tesla was different from the conservative four-door sedan prototypes big-name automakers had offered in the past.
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Original:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . Bursting onto the scene in 2006 with a sexy prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style , Tesla was something completely different from the conservative four-door sedan prototypes big-name automakers had offered in the past.
Revised:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . Bursting onto the scene in 2006 with a sexy prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style , Tesla was something completely different from the four-door sedan prototypes big-name automakers had offered in the past.
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Original:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . Bursting onto the scene in 2006 with a sexy prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style , Tesla was something completely different from the conservative four-door sedan prototypes big-name automakers had offered in the past.
Revised:  And their new Model-S is an improvement in every way - including cutting the price by nearly half . Bursting onto the scene in 2006 with a sexy prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style , Tesla was something completely different from the conservative four-door sedan prototypes that other automakers had offered in the past.
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Original:  The company recently unveiled their new Model S, which runs entirely on electricity.
Revised:  The company recently unveiled their new Model S, a sedan which runs solely on electricity.
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Original:  The vehicle first come into the automobile scene in 2006 with a prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style.
Revised:  The company first came onto the automobile scene in 2006 with a prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style.
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Original:  Tesla was different from the four-door sedan prototypes that other automakers had offered in the past.
Revised:  Tesla was different from the four-door electric sedan prototypes other automakers had offered in the past.
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Original:  The company first came onto the automobile scene in 2006  with a prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style.
Revised:  Tesla first entered the automobile market in 2006 with a prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style.
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Original:  The company first came onto the automobile scene in 2006  with a prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style.
Revised:  The company first came onto the automobile scene in 2006 , with a prototype of an electric vehicle designed on the roadster style.
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Original: JPG|Photo of the Tesla Model S , from the unveiling on March 26, 2009, at a press conference held at the SpaceX facility in Hawthorne, CA. Credit: User:Kylinne The new design is clearly aimed at a different market price point, yet the new design has increased range options, increased top end speed , and it may even be more efficient . Building the new line will be much more in-house for the California startup.
Revised: JPG|Photo of the Tesla Model S , from the unveiling on March 26, 2009, at a press conference held at the SpaceX facility in Hawthorne, CA. Credit: User:Kylinne Tesla claims the Model S has a range of up to 450km (280 miles) without recharging and can reach a top speed of 200 km/h (125 mph) . Building the new line will be much more in-house for the California startup.
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Original:  Initially plans were for a plant in New Mexico, but when that project fell apart a new opportunity was put together to build them in San Jose, CA, where the company is based
Revised:  Initially plans were for a plant in New Mexico, but instead the Model S will be built in near the company's headquarters in San Jose, CA, where the company is based
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Original:  Initially plans were for a plant in New Mexico, but when that project fell apart a new opportunity was put together to build them in San Jose, CA, where the company is based
Revised:  Initially plans were for a plant in New Mexico, but when that project fell apart a new opportunity was put together to build them in San Jose, California
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Original: MTV Networks' MTV and VH1 have secured the rights to broadcast the Live 8 series of concerts that will be taking place at venues all over Europe and in Philadelphia, Canada and Japan.
Revised: MTV Networks' MTV and VH1 have secured the rights to broadcast the Live 8 series of concerts which will be taking place at venues all over Europe and in Philadelphia, Canada and Japan.
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Original: MTV Networks' MTV and VH1 have secured the rights to broadcast the Live 8 series of concerts that will be taking place at venues all over Europe and in Philadelphia, Canada and Japan.
Revised: MTV Networks' MTV and VH1 have secured the rights to broadcast the Live 8 series of concerts that will be taking place at 8 venues in Europe, North America and Japan.
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Original:  According to MTV, this is the longest MTV has gone without a televised event since the coverage of the since the violent, riot-filled Woodstock 1999.
Revised:  According to MTV, this is the longest MTV has gone without a televised event since the coverage of the violent, riot-filled Woodstock 1999.
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Original: MTV, VH1, and it's college network, mtvU will broadcast the concert from noon to 8 PM.
Revised: MTV, VH1, and its college network, mtvU will broadcast the concert from noon to 8 PM.
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Original:  Premiere Radio Networks will broadcast the concerts tailored to the three generes of urban, rock and roll and pop music.
Revised:  Premiere Radio Networks will broadcast the concerts tailored to the three genres of urban, rock and roll and pop music.
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Original: MTV, VH1, and its college network, mtvU will broadcast the concert from noon to 8 PM.
Revised: MTV, VH1, and it's college network, mtvU will broadcast the concert from noon to 8 PM.
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Original:  The designation however has not been met with approval by some, a Local MP for Eastbourne, Nigel Waterson alleging (Channel 4 News) the "..ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
Revised:  The designation however has not been met with approval by some, a Local MP for Eastbourne, Nigel Waterson alleging (Channel 4 News) that "..ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
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Original: The South Downs, an area of chalk downland in the South of England is to gain National Park status under measures announced earlier today (March 31 2009) .
Revised: The South Downs, an area of chalk downland in the South of England is to gain National Park status under measures announced earlier today .
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Original:  The designation however has not been met with approval by some , a Local MP for Eastbourne, Nigel Waterson alleging ( Channel 4 News ) that " .. ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
Revised:  The designation has not been met with approval by some , a Local MP for Eastbourne, Nigel Waterson alleging ( Channel 4 News ) that " .. ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
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Original:  The designation however has not been met with approval by some , a Local MP for Eastbourne, Nigel Waterson alleging ( Channel 4 News ) that " .. ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
Revised:  The designation however has not been met with approval by some . Nigel Waterson, an MP for nearby Eastbournce, alleges to Channel 4 News ) that " .. ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
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Original:  The designation however has not been met with approval by some , a Local MP for Eastbourne, Nigel Waterson alleging ( Channel 4 News ) that " .. ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
Revised:  The designation however has not been met with approval by some , a Local MP for Eastbourne, Nigel Waterson alleging ( Channel 4 News that " .. ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
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Original:  The designation however has not been met with approval by some , a Local MP for Eastbourne, Nigel Waterson alleging ( Channel 4 News ) that " .. ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
Revised:  The designation however has not been met with approval by some , a Local MP for Eastbourne, Nigel Waterson alleging ( Channel 4 News ) that " ministers have ignored the views of almost all local authorities in the area, as well as local people."
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Original:  The new park and associated management is expected to be in place in two years tim
Revised:  The new park and associated management is expected to be in place in two years ' time
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Original:  The pirates had fired upon German supply boat FGS Spessart in the mistaken belief she as a commercial vessel  
Revised:  The pirates had fired upon German supply boat FGS Spessart in the mistaken belief she as a commercial vessel . 
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Original: A small pirate skiff aproached the tanker and opened fire upon her.
Revised: A small pirate skiff approached the tanker and opened fire upon her.
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Original:  A Spanish marine aircraft and two US Marine Cobra helicopers were also involved.
Revised:  A Spanish marine aircraft and two US Marine Cobra helicopters were also involved.
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Original:  The pirates had fired upon German supply boat FGS Spessart in the mistaken belief she as a commercial vessel.
Revised:  The pirates had fired upon German supply boat FGS Spessart in the mistaken belief she was a commercial vessel.
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Original:  The German Navy's Spessart, seen entering New York Harbour , was shot at by pirates]] A group of ships from several navies gave chase to a small pirate boat, leading to a capture, in the Gulf of Aden, Somalia.
Revised:  The German Navy's Spessart, seen entering New York Harbor , was shot at by pirates]] A group of ships from several navies gave chase to a small pirate boat, leading to a capture, in the Gulf of Aden, Somalia.
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Original:  The pirates are now aboard this ship, the Rheinland-Pfalz After a five-hour chase the Greeks were able to board the pirate boat, capturing the seven people on board.
Revised:  The pirates are now aboard Rheinland-Pfalz After a five-hour chase the Greeks were able to board the pirate boat, capturing the seven people on board.
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Original:  Their weapons were seized and they have been transfered to German frigate Rheinland-Pfalz for questioning pending possible prosecution.
Revised:  Their weapons were seized and they have been transferred to German frigate Rheinland-Pfalz for questioning pending possible prosecution.
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Original: File:Byron Dorgan official photo.jpg|Senator Byron Dorgan, a Democrat from North Dakota ]] In the United States Senate on Tuesday, Senators Byron Dorgan, a Democrat from North Dakota, and Mike Enzi, a Republican from Wyoming, introduced the "Freedom to Travel to Cuba Act  (S.428), a bill that would lift the travel restrictions that have prevented U.S. citizens from visiting Cuba since the early 1960s.
Revised: File:Byron Dorgan official photo.jpg|Senator Byron Dorgan, a Democrat from North Dakota ]] In the United States Senate on Tuesday, Senators Byron Dorgan, a Democrat from North Dakota, and Mike Enzi, a Republican from Wyoming, introduced the "Freedom to Travel to Cuba Act " (S.428), a bill that would lift the travel restrictions that have prevented U.S. citizens from visiting Cuba since the early 1960s.
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Original:  The bill is cosponsored by 20 senators, and the House of Representatives is considering a companion measure ( H.R. 874 ) introduced by Representatives Bill Delahunt and Jeff Flake.
Revised:  The bill is co-sponsored by 20 senators, and the House of Representatives is considering a companion measure ( H.R. 874 ) introduced by Representatives Bill Delahunt and Jeff Flake.
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Original:  The bill is cosponsored by 20 senators, and the House of Representatives is considering a companion measure ( H.R. 874 ) introduced by Representatives Bill Delahunt and Jeff Flake.
Revised:  The bill is cosponsored by 20 senators, and the House of Representatives is considering a companion measure , H.R. 874 ) introduced by Representatives Bill Delahunt and Jeff Flake.
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Original:  The bill is cosponsored by 20 senators, and the House of Representatives is considering a companion measure ( H.R. 874 ) introduced by Representatives Bill Delahunt and Jeff Flake.
Revised:  The bill is cosponsored by 20 senators, and the House of Representatives is considering a companion measure ( H.R. 874 , introduced by Representatives Bill Delahunt and Jeff Flake.
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Original:  [[File:Mike Enzi official portrait.jpg|180px|Senator Mike Enzi, a Republican from Wyoming]] Senator Dick Lugar, the ranking Republican member of the Senate Committee on Foreign Relations  spoke in favor of the bill, saying that the United States' embargo on Cuba had "failed to achieve its stated purpose of bringing democracy to the Cuban people."
Revised:  [[File:Mike Enzi official portrait.jpg|180px|Senator Mike Enzi, a Republican from Wyoming]] Senator Dick Lugar, the ranking Republican member of the Senate Committee on Foreign Relations , spoke in favor of the bill, saying that the United States' embargo on Cuba had "failed to achieve its stated purpose of bringing democracy to the Cuban people."
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Original:  The house measure has 121 cosponsors.
Revised:  The House measure has 121 cosponsors.
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Original: The S&P/Case Shiller index said that across the country, values of homes have slumped over 30\% since their peak in 2006.
Revised: The S&P/Case Shiller index said that across the country, values of homes have slumped over 30\% since their peak in 2006 across the country.
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Original: According to data released on Tuesday, home prices in the United States plunged at the highest rates ever recorded on January.
Revised: According to data released on Tuesday, home prices in the United States plunged at the highest rates ever recorded in January.
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Original:  Most of the nation appears to remain on a downward path," said  chairman of S&P's index committee, David Blitzer, in a statement.
Revised:  Most of the nation appears to remain on a downward path," said the chairman of S&P's index committee, David Blitzer, in a statement.
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Original:  In the year to this January, prices have fell by nineteen percent .
Revised:  In the year to this January, prices have fell by 19\% .
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Original:  In the year to this January, prices have fell by 19\%.
Revised:  In the year to this January, prices have by 19\%.
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Original:  In the year to this January, prices have by 19\%.
Revised:  In the year to this January, prices fell by 19\%.
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Original:  Approximately 6:30 am local time (CST) the object appeared to early morning travelers, commuters and joggers.
Revised:  At approximately 6:30 am local time (CST) the object appeared to early morning travelers, commuters and joggers.
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Original:  Approximately 6:30 am local time (CST) the object appeared to early morning travelers, commuters and joggers.
Revised:  Approximately 6:30 a.m. local time (CST) the object appeared to early morning travelers, commuters and joggers.
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Original:  Approximately 6:30 am local time (CST) the object appeared to early morning travelers, commuters and joggers.
Revised:  Approximately 6:30 am local time (CST) the objectto early morning travelers, commuters and joggers.
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Original:  “ It kind of glowed green, and it looked like it was falling very, very quickly.
Revised:  " It kind of glowed green, and it looked like it was falling very, very quickly.
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Original:  It just kind of reminded me of a falling star or something .” said Cheryl Cook-Taylor, who was traveling to work in North Battleford, Saskatchewan.
Revised:  It just kind of reminded me of a falling star or something ," said Cheryl Cook-Taylor, who was traveling to work in North Battleford, Saskatchewan.
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Original:  At approximately 6:30 a.m. local time (CST) the objectto early morning travelers, commuters and joggers.
Revised:  At approximately 6:30 a.m. local time (CST) the object appeared to early morning travelers, commuters and joggers.
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Original:  A huge meteorite had disintegrated, and pieces were found near the border city of Lloydminster  
Revised:  A huge meteorite had disintegrated, and pieces were found near the border city of Lloydminster . 
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Original:  A bright object, likely a meteor, was seen shooting across the sky and was sighted by residents across the Canadian plains early Tuesday morning.
Revised:  A bright object, likely a meteor, was seen shooting across the sky and was sighted by residents across the Canadian prairies early Tuesday morning.
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Original: [[File:Women wearing burka in Afghanistan.jpg|Women in burqas cross a market in Parwan Province, Afghanistan  ]]Nonetheless some changes were made to the bill;
Revised: [[File:Women wearing burka in Afghanistan.jpg|Women in burqas cross a market in Parwan Province, Afghanistan . ]]Nonetheless some changes were made to the bill;
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Original:  requiring the husband's permission  leave the house, obtain education or employment, or to see a doctor;
Revised:  requiring the husband's permission to leave the house, obtain education or employment, or to see a doctor;
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Original:  the proposed  age of marriage for girls of 9 was raised to 16  and temporary marriage is not provided for.
Revised:  the proposed age of marriage for girls was raised to 16 and temporary marriage is not provided for.
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Original:  File:Women wearing burka in Afghanistan.jpg|Women in burqas cross a market in Parwan Province, Afghanistan.
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Original:  Itar-tass reports that 68 people were arrested, questioned and allowed to go home
Revised:  ITAR-TASS reports that 68 people were arrested, questioned and allowed to go home
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Original:  At one point,  few concrete blocks and bricks flew.
Revised:  At one point, a few concrete blocks and bricks flew.
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Original:  Fists and baseball bats were used in a quarrel over land property between employess of two firms.
Revised:  Fists and baseball bats were used in a quarrel over land property between employees of two firms.
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Original: The International Organisation for Migration  stated that over two hundred Arab and African migrants are feared drowned after three boats, bound for Europe, sank in the Mediterranean  . "A boat with 257 migrants on board sank on Sunday off the coast of Libya.
Revised: The International Organisation for Migration (IOM) stated that over two hundred Arab and African migrants are feared drowned after three boats, bound for Europe, sank in the Mediterranean . "A boat with 257 migrants on board sank on Sunday off the coast of Libya.
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Original:  Twenty-three people were saved and 21 bodies were retrieved ", said the IOM chief of mission in Libya's capital of Tripoli, Laurence Hart   .
Revised:  Twenty-three people were saved and 21 bodies were retrieved ," said the IOM chief of mission in Libya's capital of Tripoli, Laurence Hart .
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Original:  Twenty-three people were saved and 21 bodies were retrieved ", said the IOM chief of mission in Libya's capital of Tripoli, Laurence Hart   .
Revised:  Twenty-three people were saved and 21 bodies were retrieved ", said the IOM chief of mission in Libya's capital of Tripoli, Laurence Hart . .
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Original:  This tragic incident illustrates, once again, the dangers faced by people caught in mixed irregular movements of migrants and refugees in the Mediterranean and elsewhere which every year cost thousands of lives," said UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) spokesman Ron Redmond   
Revised:  This tragic incident illustrates, once again, the dangers faced by people caught in mixed irregular movements of migrants and refugees in the Mediterranean and elsewhere which every year cost thousands of lives," said UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) spokesman Ron Redmond . 
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Original:  Private and public sector workers alike are protesting mass lay-offs, age discrimination of employees, lowering pensions to 40\%, denouncing responsibilities of employers regarding collective contracts and  eight hour work day.
Revised:  Private and public sector workers alike are protesting mass lay-offs, age discrimination of employees, lowering pensions to 40\%, denouncing responsibilities of employers regarding collective contracts and demanding an eight hour work day.
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Original:  Public transportation operated with  low number of vehicles  and administration and civil servants stopped working for three hours during the day.
Revised:  Public transportation operated with a low number of vehicles and administration and civil servants stopped working for three hours during the day.
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