wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Here are Miguel de Cervantes' request for an official post, the Bull of Demarcation Inter caetera of Pope Alexander VI that divided the world between Spain and Portugal, the journal of Christopher Columbus, maps and plans of the colonial American cities, in addition to the ordinary archives that reveal the month-to-month workings of the whole vast colonial machinery, which have been mined by every Spanish historian in the last two centuries.
Revised:  Here are Miguel de Cervantes' request for an official post, the Bull of Demarcation Inter caetera of Pope Alexander VI that divided the world between Spain and Portugal, the journal of Christopher Columbus, maps and plans of the colonial American cities, in addition to the ordinary archives that reveal the month-to-month workings of the whole vast colonial machinery, which have been mined by many historians in the last two centuries.
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Original:  Contents View of the main courtyard.
Revised: Researchers who wish to examine the archive's sources use another building located across the street. Contents View of the main courtyard.
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Original:  The digitized sources are accessible online URL
Revised:  The digitized sources are accessible online 
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Original:  There are non-REM ( Rapid-Eye-Movement ) and REM sleep stages.
Revised:  There are non-REM ( rapid eye movement ) and REM sleep stages.
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Original:  There are non-REM (rapid eye movement) and REM sleepstages.
Revised:  Mammalian sleep can be sub-divided into two distinct phases - REM (rapid eye movement) and REM sleepstages.
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Original:  As a result, Blood glucose levels return to normal.
Revised:  As a result, blood glucose levels return to normal.
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Original:  Leptin, released by adipose tissue, is a hormone that is inhibits appetite and increases energy expenditure.
Revised:  Leptin, released by adipose tissue, is a hormone that inhibits appetite and increases energy expenditure.
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Original:  When the participants were tested after sleep deprivation, they took 40\% longer than normal to regulate blood sugar levels after a high-carbohydrate meals .
Revised:  When the participants were tested after sleep deprivation, they took 40\% longer than normal to regulate blood sugar levels after a high-carbohydrate meal .
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Original: Rhys Morgan (born 1994) is a consumer watchdog, science activist, and health blogger from Wales who first received acclaim in 2010 when, at the age of 15, he played a key role in raising awareness of the health risks of Miracle Mineral Supplement.
Revised: Rhys Morgan (born 1994) is a blogger from Wales who first received acclaim in 2010 when, at the age of 15, he played a key role in raising awareness of the health risks of Miracle Mineral Supplement.
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Original:  He attended Cardiff High School, where he studied mathematics, chemistry, biology and psychology at AS level, before going on to study for a BSc (Hons) in Health Sciences with the Open University.
Revised:  He attended Cardiff High School, where he studied mathematics, chemistry, biology and psychology at AS level, before studying for a BSc (Hons) in Health Sciences with the Open University.
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Original: Hay House is a New Thought and self-help publisher founded in 1984 by author Louise Hay, Q A: Reid Tracy;
Revised: Hay House is a publisher founded in 1984 by author Louise Hay, Q A: Reid Tracy;
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Original: Hay House is a New Thought and self-help publisher founded in 1984 by author Louise Hay, Q A: Reid Tracy;
Revised: Hay House is a New Thought and self-help publisher founded in 1984 by author Louise Hay, A: Reid Tracy;
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Original:  They also have spin off websites such as  House Online Learning a place to take online classes by their authors, and Heal Your Life, an online self-help and personal growth program.
Revised:  They also have spin off websites such as Hay House Online Learning a place to take online classes by their authors, and Heal Your Life, an online self-help and personal growth program.
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Original:  They also have spin off websites such as Hay House Online Learning  a place to take online classes by their authors, and Heal Your Life, an online self-help and personal growth program.
Revised:  They also have spin off websites such as Hay House Online Learning , a place to take online classes by their authors, and Heal Your Life, an online self-help and personal growth program.
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Original:  Penny C. Sansevieri of the Huffington Post explains that companies like Balboa Press use the name of publishers like Hay House to prey on the hopes and dreams of aspiring authors by using unclear language that makes authors think they are being published by Hay House, or that they somehow have a better chance of being picked up by Hay House.
Revised:  Penny C. Sansevieri of the Huffington Post argued that companies like Balboa Press use the name of publishers like Hay House to prey on the hopes and dreams of aspiring authors by using unclear language that makes authors think they are being published by Hay House, or that they somehow have a better chance of being picked up by Hay House.
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Original:  The authors gain merit with the publisher based on the testimonials they receive as opposed to the credibility or accuracy of their claims . Balboa Press In 2010 Author Solutions partnered with Hay House to create a self-publishing branch, called Balboa Press.
Revised:  The authors gain merit with the publisher based on the testimonials they receive as opposed to the credibility or accuracy of their claims Balboa Press In 2010 Author Solutions partnered with Hay House to create a self-publishing branch, called Balboa Press.
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Original:  Hay House promotes the idea that “ traditional Western learning, as codified by universities that bestow fancy degrees, is woefully incomplete, sometimes harmful, and must be supplemented by other ways of knowing ” . Hay House founder, Louise Hay, explains that Hay House does not actually endorse everything their authors write.
Revised:  Hay House promotes the idea that " traditional Western learning, as codified by universities that bestow fancy degrees, is woefully incomplete, sometimes harmful, and must be supplemented by other ways of knowing ” . Hay House founder, Louise Hay, explains that Hay House does not actually endorse everything their authors write.
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Original:  Hay House promotes the idea that “ traditional Western learning, as codified by universities that bestow fancy degrees, is woefully incomplete, sometimes harmful, and must be supplemented by other ways of knowing ” . Hay House founder, Louise Hay, explains that Hay House does not actually endorse everything their authors write.
Revised:  Hay House promotes the idea that “ traditional Western learning, as codified by universities that bestow fancy degrees, is woefully incomplete, sometimes harmful, and must be supplemented by other ways of knowing " . Hay House founder, Louise Hay, explains that Hay House does not actually endorse everything their authors write.
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Original:  In a 2008 article Oppenheimer quotes current CEO, Reid Tracy, as saying, “ As of right now we’ve sold over 40 million products in the U.S., and we think a lot of those people have been helped.
Revised:  In a 2008 article Oppenheimer quotes current CEO, Reid Tracy, as saying, " As of right now we’ve sold over 40 million products in the U.S., and we think a lot of those people have been helped.
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Original:  ” Hay House does not test the claims made by their authors.
Revised:  " Hay House does not test the claims made by their authors.
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Original: History An analysis of Ancient American Engineering works show that those engineers also had adhered strictly to two important principles: the efficient use of the resources available and the effectiveness of a project design.
Revised: History An analysis of Ancient American Engineering works shows that the engineers adhered strictly to two important principles: the efficient use of the resources available and the effectiveness of a project design.
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Original:  Nor they had sophisticated means of transportation , only animals for carrying cargo and even that only in certain regions.
Revised:  Nor was there any sophisticated means of transportation , only animals for carrying cargo and even that only in certain regions.
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Original:  Nor they had sophisticated means of transportation , only animals for carrying cargo and even that only in certain regions.
Revised:  Nor they had sophisticated means of transportation - only animals for carrying cargo and even that only in certain regions.
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Original:  Nor they had sophisticated means of transportation , only animals for carrying cargo and even that only in certain regions.
Revised:  Nor they had sophisticated means of transportation , only animals for carrying cargo and , even these, only in certain regions.
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Original:  The construction of many ancient works seems to have  prolonged for decades, if not centuries.
Revised:  The construction of many ancient works seems to have been prolonged for decades, if not centuries.
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Original: Adobe structures are constructed with bricks created from sand, clay, and water, with some fibrous or organic material, shaped using frames and dried in the sun.
Revised: Adobe structures were constructed with bricks created from sand, clay, and water, with some fibrous or organic material, shaped using frames and dried in the sun.
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Original:  In response to the warm summer weather they made the overhanging lip of the cliff blocking off the high summer sun, so it was much cooler and more comfortable.
Revised:  In response to the warm summer weather , they used the overhanging lip of the cliff blocking off the high summer sun, so it was much cooler and more comfortable.
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Original:  In response to the warm summer weather they made the overhanging lip of the cliff blocking off the high summer sun, so it was much cooler and more comfortable.
Revised:  In response to the warm summer weather they made the overhanging lip of the cliff to block off the high summer sun, so it was much cooler and more comfortable.
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Original:  Tenochtitlan was connected to the mainland by causeways leading in and out of the city.
Revised: The City-state Tenochtitlan was connected to the mainland by causeways leading in and out of the city.
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Original: Ancient American Engineering refers to early American applied scientific and mathematical knowledge used  design and build structures, machines, devices, systems and material prior to the arrival and influence of Western and Eastern Civilizations.
Revised: Ancient American Engineering refers to early American applied scientific and mathematical knowledge used to design and build structures, machines, devices, systems and material prior to the arrival and influence of Western and Eastern Civilizations.
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Original:  They were the Aztecs, Incas, Mayans, and Anasazi, and covered two continents.
Revised:  This knowledge belonged to the Aztecs, Incas, Mayans, and Anasazi, and covered two continents.
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Original:  All of the buildings are aligned with the stars and the solar system from precise survey points in the nearby mountain range, using an advanced understanding of mathematics, geometry and astronomy.
Revised:  All of the buildings are aligned with the stars and the Solar System from precise survey points in the nearby mountain range, using an advanced understanding of mathematics, geometry and astronomy.
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Original: Psychoanalysis also describes as 'acting in' the process whereby the analyst brings his  personal countertransference into the analytic situation - as opposed to the converse, the acting out of the patient's transference.
Revised: Psychoanalysis also describes as 'acting in' the process whereby the analyst brings his or her personal countertransference into the analytic situation - as opposed to the converse, the acting out of the patient's transference.
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Original: The term was used in 1957 by Meyer A. Zeligs to refer specifically to the postures taken by analysands in a psychoanalytic session.
Revised: The term was used in 1957 by Meyer A. Zeligs to refer specifically to the postures taken by analysts in a psychoanalytic session.
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Original:  Kannada Panchamrutha Navya Lifeu Ishtene Paramathma || Pavithra || |- | Oriyardori Asal ||Priya || Tulu || Nominated, Red FM Tulu Film Award for Best Actress |- | Mallikarjuna Nandini Kannada 2013 Bulbul Nisha 2015 Notorious Adrushta Doodhsagar Special appearance Madime || || Tulu || |- | 2016 || Sri Sathyanarayana || || rowspan="4" | Kannada || |- | rowspan="2" | 2017 || Anveshi || || |- | Toss || || |- | TBA || Premaya Namah'' Delayed
Revised:  Kannada Panchamrutha Navya Lifeu Ishtene Paramathma || Pavithra || |- | Oriyardori Asal ||Priya || Tulu || Nominated, Red FM Tulu Film Award for Best Actress |- | Mallikarjuna Nandini Kannada 2013 Bulbul Nisha 2015 Notorious Adrushta Doodhsagar Special appearance Madime || || Tulu || |- | 2016 || Sri Sathyanarayana || || rowspan="4" | Kannada || |- | rowspan="2" | 2017 || Anveshi || || |- | Toss || || |- | || Premaya Namah'' Delayed
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Original:  Kannada Panchamrutha Navya Lifeu Ishtene Paramathma || Pavithra || |- | Oriyardori Asal ||Priya || Tulu || Nominated, Red FM Tulu Film Award for Best Actress |- | Mallikarjuna Nandini Kannada 2013 Bulbul Nisha 2015 Notorious Adrushta Doodhsagar Special appearance Madime || || Tulu || |- | 2016 || Sri Sathyanarayana || || rowspan="4" | Kannada || |- | rowspan=" 2 " | 2017 || Anveshi || || |- | Toss || || |- | | | Premaya Namah'' Delayed
Revised:  Kannada Panchamrutha Navya Lifeu Ishtene Paramathma || Pavithra || |- | Oriyardori Asal ||Priya || Tulu || Nominated, Red FM Tulu Film Award for Best Actress |- | Mallikarjuna Nandini Kannada 2013 Bulbul Nisha 2015 Notorious Adrushta Doodhsagar Special appearance Madime || || Tulu || |- | 2016 || Sri Sathyanarayana || || rowspan="4" | Kannada || |- | rowspan=" 2 " | 2017 || Anveshi || || |- | Toss || || |- | Premaya Namah'' Delayed
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Original: Filmography Year Film Role Language Notes 2008 Hani Hani Kannada Neenyare Megha Kannada Kshudra Telugu 2009 Nannedeya Haadu Pallavi Kannada Mathiya Chennai Tamil 2010 Nee Bandu Nintaaga Kannada Pancharangi Latha Nominated, Filmfare Award for Best Supporting Actress –
Revised: Filmography Year Film Role Language Notes 2008 Hani Hani Kannada Neenyare Megha Kshudra Telugu 2009 Nannedeya Haadu Pallavi Kannada Mathiya Chennai Tamil 2010 Nee Bandu Nintaaga Kannada Pancharangi Latha Nominated, Filmfare Award for Best Supporting Actress –
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Original:  Kannada Panchamrutha Navya Lifeu Ishtene Paramathma || Pavithra || |- | Oriyardori Asal ||Priya || Tulu || Nominated, Red FM Tulu Film Award for Best Actress |- | Mallikarjuna Nandini Kannada 2013 Bulbul Nisha 2015 Notorious Adrushta Doodhsagar Special appearance Madime || || Tulu || |- | 2016 || Sri Sathyanarayana || || rowspan="4" | Kannada || |- | rowspan="3" | 2017 || Anveshi || || |- | Toss || || |- | Premaya Namah'' Delayed
Revised:  Kannada Panchamrutha Navya Lifeu Ishtene Paramathma || Pavithra || |- | Oriyardori Asal ||Priya || Tulu || Nominated, Red FM Tulu Film Award for Best Actress |- | Mallikarjuna Nandini Kannada 2013 Bulbul Nisha 2015 Notorious Adrushta Doodhsagar Special appearance Madime || || Tulu || |- | 2016 || Sri Sathyanarayana || || rowspan="4" | Kannada || |- | rowspan="3" | 2017 || Anveshi || || |- | Toss || || |- | Premaya Namah'' 
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Original: Ramya Barna Fahaad (born 4 August 1986) is an Indian film actress, primarily appearing in Kannada films.
Revised: Ramya Barna (born 4 August 1986) is an Indian film actress, primarily appearing in Kannada films.
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Original:  She married to Fahaad on 29 May 2017 who is a well known businessman.
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Original: The need to understand the cognitive support that information processing technologies would serve when used as compensatory systems for older adults in order to maintain longer periods of functional independence requires the use of technology Technology and its specific needs from the perspective of older adults.
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Original:  An important factor to be considered with old age is cognitive Cognition decline.
Revised:  An important factor to be considered with old age is cognitive decline.
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Original:  Thus information processing technologies need to be centered on factors that define cognition and by doing so highlight some of the important conceptual models Conceptual model and theories that govern design of such systems.
Revised:  Thus information processing technologies need to be centered on factors that define cognition . This article highlights some of the important conceptual models Conceptual model and theories that govern design of such systems.
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Original:  Thus information processing technologies need to be centered on factors that define cognition and by doing so highlight some of the important conceptual models Conceptual model and theories that govern design of such systems.
Revised:  Thus information processing technologies need to be centered on factors that define cognition and by doing so highlight some of the important conceptual models and theories that govern design of such systems.
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Original:  Introduction As the nation’s baby boomers grow older, there exists a growing demand for a good support system that can ease their burden.
Revised:  As the nation’s baby boomers grow older, there exists a growing demand for a good support system that can ease their burden.
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Original:  The advent of technology has shown promising results in various fields such as the delivery of care and in-vehicle driving technology Intelligent vehicle technologies by focusing on the needs of older adults and placing them at the center of this transformation.
Revised:  The advent of technology has shown promising results in various fields such as the delivery of care and in-vehicle driving technology by focusing on the needs of older adults and placing them at the center of this transformation.
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Original:  Yet there continues to exist a digital divide Digital divide amongst the elderly population with less use of technology causing them to become disenfranchised and disadvantaged.
Revised:  Yet there continues to exist a digital divide amongst the elderly population with less use of technology causing them to become disenfranchised and disadvantaged.
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Original:  Thus an important task in the field of gerontology Gerontology is to develop training tools that can aid and improve accessibility Accessibility for older adults.
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Original:  Thus an important task in the field of gerontology Gerontology is to develop training tools that can aid and improve accessibility Accessibility for older adults.
Revised:  Thus an important task in the field of gerontology Gerontology is to develop training tools that can aid and improve accessibility for older adults.
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Original:  Cognitive capabilities refer to generally our mental abilities by which we pay attention to the world, interpret the information around us, learn and remember, solve problems and make decisions.
Revised:  Cognitive capabilities refer our mental abilities by which we pay attention to the world, interpret the information around us, learn and remember, solve problems and make decisions.
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Original:  Cognitive aging causes a change in mechanism related to information processing Information processing, working memory Working memory functionand have also been shown to mediate age-related decline that is often observed in cognitive tasks .
Revised:  Cognitive aging causes a change in mechanism related to information processing and working memory function .
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Original:  According to Craik (2000) , these mechanisms are responsible for age-related speed of decline in performance for mental processing Mental process along with a reduction of on-line cognitive resources available at any given time to process, store, retrieve, and transform information (working memory), focusing on a target, paying attention, and sensory URL of information.
Revised:  According to Craik , these mechanisms are responsible for age-related speed of decline in performance for mental processing Mental process along with a reduction of on-line cognitive resources available at any given time to process, store, retrieve, and transform information (working memory), focusing on a target, paying attention, and sensory URL of information.
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Original:  According to Craik (2000) , these mechanisms are responsible for age-related speed of decline in performance for mental processing Mental process along with a reduction of on-line cognitive resources available at any given time to process, store, retrieve, and transform information (working memory), focusing on a target, paying attention, and sensory URL of information.
Revised:  According to Craik (2000) , these mechanisms are responsible for age-related speed of decline in performance for mental processing along with a reduction of on-line cognitive resources available at any given time to process, store, retrieve, and transform information (working memory), focusing on a target, paying attention, and sensory URL of information.
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Original:  According to Craik (2000) , these mechanisms are responsible for age-related speed of decline in performance for mental processing Mental process along with a reduction of on-line cognitive resources available at any given time to process, store, retrieve, and transform information (working memory), focusing on a target, paying attention, and sensory URL of information.
Revised:  According to Craik (2000) , these mechanisms are responsible for age-related speed of decline in performance for mental processing Mental process along with a reduction of on-line cognitive resources available at any given time to process, store, retrieve, and transform information (working memory), focusing on a target, paying attention, and sensory processing of information.
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Original:   This is important since the inherent relationship between cognitive abilities and technology adoption points to the importance of ensuring that system interfaces Interface (computing) are well designed and easy to use.
Revised:  URL This is important since the inherent relationship between cognitive abilities and technology adoption points to the importance of ensuring that system interfaces Interface (computing) are well designed and easy to use.
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Original:   This is important since the inherent relationship between cognitive abilities and technology adoption points to the importance of ensuring that system interfaces Interface (computing) are well designed and easy to use.
Revised:  This is important since the inherent relationship between cognitive abilities and technology adoption points to the importance of ensuring that system interfaces are well designed and easy to use.
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Original:  The use of information processing theory in cognition looks at the role of the three stages of memory Memory related to retrieving information, transferring and recalling.
Revised:  The use of information processing theory in cognition looks at the role of the three stages of memory related to retrieving information, transferring and recalling.
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