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Original:  Finally, Japan scored and advanced to the championship match at the final day with a final score of 2-1 . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their own matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to win their opponents easily.
Revised:  Finally, Japan won with a final score of 2-1, and advanced to the championship match at the final day with a final score of 2-1 . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their own matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to win their opponents easily.
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Original:  Finally, Japan scored and advanced to the championship match at the final day with a final score of 2-1 . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their own matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to win their opponents easily.
Revised:  Finally, Japan scored and advanced to the championship match on the final day with a final score of 2-1 . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their own matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to win their opponents easily.
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Original:  Finally, Japan scored and advanced to the championship match at the final day with a final score of 2-1 . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their own matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to win their opponents easily.
Revised:  Finally, Japan scored and advanced to the championship match at the final day . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their own matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to win their opponents easily.
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Original:  Finally, Japan scored and advanced to the championship match at the final day with a final score of 2-1 . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their own matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to win their opponents easily.
Revised:  Finally, Japan scored and advanced to the championship match at the final day with a final score of 2-1 . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their respective Group matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to win their opponents easily.
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Original:  Finally, Japan scored and advanced to the championship match at the final day with a final score of 2-1 . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their own matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to win their opponents easily.
Revised:  Finally, Japan scored and advanced to the championship match at the final day with a final score of 2-1 . After group standings were mostly stabilized in the third day of competition, Thailand and Japan handled their own matches by replacing several substitutes with frequently lined-up players to defeat their opponents easily.
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Original:  They will face off at the final day for the gold medal of soccer event in the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008".
Revised:  They will face off on the final day for the gold medal of soccer event in the "Invitational Games for the Deaf, Taipei 2008".
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Original:  The police accuse them of drug traffic and connections with a criminal organization in Rio de Janeiro.
Revised:  The police accuse them of drug trafficking and connections with a criminal organization in Rio de Janeiro.
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Original:  The prison happened this Monday, June 6, by morning
Revised:  The arrest happened this Monday, June 6, by morning
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Original:  Back on September 5, Wikinews sent freelance photographer Richard Burdett to the eTalk Festival Party, held by television broadcaster CTV.
Revised:  Previously, on September 5, Wikinews sent freelance photographer Richard Burdett to the eTalk Festival Party, held by television broadcaster CTV.
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Original:  Toronto is a buzz as the stars walk among them, during the 2008 Toronto International Film Festival.
Revised:  Toronto is abuzz as the stars walk among them, during the 2008 Toronto International Film Festival.
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Original:  Toronto is abuzz as the stars walk among them, during the 2008 Toronto International Film Festival.
Revised:  Toronto residents are abuzz as the stars walk among them, during the 2008 Toronto International Film Festival.
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Original:  The festival has become one of the most popular in the world , over the last few years . Previously, on September 5, Wikinews sent freelance photographer Richard Burdett to the eTalk Festival Party, held by television broadcaster CTV.
Revised:  The festival has become one of the most popular in the world . Previously, on September 5, Wikinews sent freelance photographer Richard Burdett to the eTalk Festival Party, held by television broadcaster CTV.
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Original:  The festival has become one of the most popular in the world , over the last few years . Previously, on September 5, Wikinews sent freelance photographer Richard Burdett to the eTalk Festival Party, held by television broadcaster CTV.
Revised:  The festival has become one of the most popular in the world , over the last few years . On September 5, Wikinews sent freelance photographer Richard Burdett to the eTalk Festival Party, held by television broadcaster CTV.
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Original:  DJ Samantha Ronson spun well into the night for revelers, as gal pal Lindsay Lohan hid from prying eyes , inside the building.
Revised:  DJ Samantha Ronson spun well into the night for revelers, as Lindsay Lohan hid from prying eyes , inside the building.
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Original:  DJ Samantha Ronson spun well into the night for revelers, as gal pal Lindsay Lohan hid from prying eyes , inside the building.
Revised:  DJ Samantha Ronson spun well into the night for revelers, as gal pal Lindsay Lohan hid from prying eyes inside the building.
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Original: 120px|John McCain |120px|Barack ObamaUnited States presidential candidate John McCain now retains a lead over Barack Obama in several polls conducted in the last few days.
Revised: 120px|John McCain |120px|Barack ObamaUnited States presidential candidate John McCain now retains a lead over Barack Obama in several polls conducted in the past few days.
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Original:  Both Zogby and Rasmussen have John McCain with a slight, but not statistically significant lead.
Revised:  Both Zogby and Rasmussen have McCain with a slight, but not statistically significant lead.
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Original:  The most recent Gallup tracking poll has McCain with a statistical lead of 5.0 \% . The Day to Day Politics Poll Average also has a slight, but not statistically significantly lead of 0.4\% for John McCain.
Revised:  The most recent Gallup tracking poll has McCain with a statistical lead of 5.0 percent . The Day to Day Politics Poll Average also has a slight, but not statistically significantly lead of 0.4\% for John McCain.
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Original:  Barack Obama had a 6.0 \% lead in the Day to Day Politics Poll Average after the Democratic National Convention, but now is trailing after the Republican National Convention and the announcement of Sarah Palin as John's McCain's running mate.
Revised:  Barack Obama had a 6.0 percent lead in the Day to Day Politics Poll Average after the Democratic National Convention, but now is trailing after the Republican National Convention and the announcement of Sarah Palin as John's McCain's running mate.
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Original:  Barack Obama had a 6.0 \% lead in the Day to Day Politics Poll Average after the Democratic National Convention, but now is trailing after the Republican National Convention and the announcement of Sarah Palin as John's McCain's running mate.
Revised:  Barack Obama had a 6.0 \% lead in the Day to Day Politics Poll Average after the Democratic National Convention, but now is trailing after the Republican National Convention and the announcement of Sarah Palin as McCain's running mate.
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Original:  This is the first time John McCain has led over Barack Obama in the poll average since the two candidates emerged  after the primaries.
Revised:  This is the first time McCain has led over Barack Obama in the poll average since the two candidates emerged after the primaries.
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Original:  This is the first time John McCain has led over Barack Obama in the poll average since the two candidates emerged  after the primaries.
Revised:  This is the first time John McCain has led Obama in the poll average since the two candidates emerged after the primaries.
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Original:  After McCain has added Alaskan Governor Sarah Palinto his nomination ticket and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll has shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 \% . The Democrats enthusiasm has only increased by 10\% since the addition of Joe Biden to the nomination ticket and after the Democratic National Convention.
Revised:  After McCain chose Palin, the current Govener of Alaska, as his vice presidential candidate and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll has shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 \% . The Democrats enthusiasm has only increased by 10\% since the addition of Joe Biden to the nomination ticket and after the Democratic National Convention.
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Original:  After McCain has added Alaskan Governor Sarah Palinto his nomination ticket and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll has shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 \% . The Democrats enthusiasm has only increased by 10\% since the addition of Joe Biden to the nomination ticket and after the Democratic National Convention.
Revised:  After McCain has added Alaskan Governor Sarah Palinto his nomination ticket and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll has shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 percentage . The Democrats enthusiasm has only increased by 10\% since the addition of Joe Biden to the nomination ticket and after the Democratic National Convention.
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Original:  This is the first time McCain has led Obama in the poll average since the two candidates emerged as their parties 's presumptive nominees after the primaries.
Revised:  This is the first time McCain has led Obama in the poll average since the two candidates emerged as their partiy 's presumptive nominees after the primaries.
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Original:  After McCain chose Palin, the current Govener of Alaska, as his vice presidential candidate and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll has shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 percentage .
Revised:  After McCain chose Palin, the current Governer of Alaska, as his vice presidential candidate and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll has shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 percentage .
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Original:  After McCain chose Palin, the current Govener of Alaska, as his vice presidential candidate and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll has shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 percentage .
Revised:  After McCain chose Palin, the current Govener of Alaska, as his vice presidential candidate and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll had shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 percentage .
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Original:  After McCain chose Palin, the current Govener of Alaska, as his vice presidential candidate and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll has shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 percentage .
Revised:  After McCain chose Palin, the current Govener of Alaska, as his vice presidential candidate and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll has shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18 \% .
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Original:  Both Zogby and Rasmussen have McCain with a slight, but not statistically significant lead.
Revised:  Both Zogby International and Rasmussen Reports have McCain with a slight, but not statistically significant lead.
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Original:  Two days after gaining the lead in the polls, John McCain' s lead has increased in the Day to Day Politics Poll Average to a 2.6\% lead.
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Original: After McCain chose Palin, the current Governer of Alaska, as his vice presidential candidate and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll had shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18\%.
Revised: After McCain chose Palin, the current Governor of Alaska, as his vice presidential candidate and the Republican National Convention, a Gallup poll had shown that the percentage of Republicans who are enthusiastic about voting has increased by 18\%.
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Original: September 8, 2008 is the 2nd major day of the 2008 Paralympic games, the below article summarises all the world records and medals.
Revised: September 8, 2008 is the 2nd major day of the 2008 Paralympic games, the below article summaries all the world records and medals.
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Original:  Events Women's S6 100 metres freestyle Eleanor Simmonds, Great Britain's youngest athlete at the paralympic gameswon the gold medal in the women's S6 100 metres freestyle, despite the fact that she is only aged 13.
Revised:  Events Women's S6 100 metres freestyle Eleanor Simmonds, Great Britain's youngest athlete at the paralympic games, won the gold medal in the women's S6 100 metres freestyle, despite the fact that she is only aged 13.
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Original:  Simmonds, who has achondroplasia said that " i can't believe it."
Revised:  Simmonds, who has achondroplasia said that " I can't believe it."
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Original:  T54 womens 's 5000m Six of the eleven competitors in the final of the T54 class womens's 5000m event failed to complete the course after a crash near the end of the race.
Revised:  T54 women 's 5000m Six of the eleven competitors in the final of the T54 class womens's 5000m event failed to complete the course after a crash near the end of the race.
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Original: September 8, 2008 is the 2nd major day of the 2008 Paralympic games, the below article summaries all the world records and medals.
Revised: September 8, 2008 is the 2nd major day of the 2008 Paralympic games, the below article summaries all the highlights.
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Original:  However, only copyright holders can issue DCMA takedowns," Jeschke said.
Revised:  However, only copyright holders can issue DMCA takedowns," Jeschke said.
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Original:  The videos removed were done so by a single Digital Millennium Copyright Act (DMCA) notice by an alleged 'rights group' called the American Rights Counsel LLC, which Wikinews has confirmed, does not exist beyond the scope of those requests.
Revised:  The videos removed were done so by a single Digital Millennium Copyright Act (DMCA) notices by an alleged 'rights group' called the American Rights Counsel LLC, which Wikinews has confirmed, does not exist beyond the scope of those requests.
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Original:  The videos removed were done so by the submission of over 4000 Digital Millennium Copyright Act (DMCA) notices by an alleged 'rights group' called the American Rights Counsel LLC, which Wikinews has confirmed, does not exist beyond the scope of those requests.
Revised:  The videos removed were done so by the submission of over 4000 Digital Millennium Copyright Act (DMCA) notice by an alleged 'rights group' called the American Rights Counsel LLC, which Wikinews has confirmed, does not exist beyond the scope of those requests.
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Original:  The videos removed were done so by a single Digital Millennium Copyright Act (DMCA) notice by an alleged 'rights group' called the American Rights Counsel LLC, which Wikinews has confirmed , does not exist beyond the scope of those requests.
Revised:  The videos removed were done so by a single Digital Millennium Copyright Act (DMCA) notice by an alleged 'rights group' called the American Rights Counsel LLC, which Wikinews has confirmed does not exist beyond the scope of those requests.
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Original: REDIRECT SEE COLLABORATION PAGE FOR FURTHER Asif Ali Zardari, sworn in as President of Pakistan.
Revised:  Asif Ali Zardari, sworn in as President of Pakistan.
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Original: Asif Ali Zardari , sworn in as  President of Pakistan.
Revised: Asif Ali Zardari has been sworn in as President of Pakistan.
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Original: Asif Ali Zardari , sworn in as  President of Pakistan.
Revised: Asif Ali Zardari , sworn in as the President of Pakistan.
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Original:  A 53 years old Asif Zardari took oath from Chief Justice of Pakistan Mr Justice Abdul Hameed Dogar here at Islamabad on Tuesday.
Revised:  The 53-year-old Asif Zardari took oath from Chief Justice of Pakistan Mr Justice Abdul Hameed Dogar here at Islamabad on Tuesday.
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Original:  A 53 years old Asif Zardari took oath from Chief Justice of Pakistan Mr Justice Abdul Hameed Dogar here at Islamabad on Tuesday.
Revised:  A 53 years old Asif Zardari took oath from Chief Justice Abdul Hameed Dogar here at Islamabad on Tuesday.
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Original:  A 53 years old Asif Zardari took oath from Chief Justice of Pakistan Mr Justice Abdul Hameed Dogar here at Islamabad on Tuesday.
Revised:  A 53 years old Asif Zardari took oath from Chief Justice of Pakistan Mr Justice Abdul Hameed Dogar here in Islamabad on Tuesday.
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Original:  He took oath as a 12th President of Pakistan.
Revised:  He took oath as the 12th President of Pakistan.
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Original: , Asif Ali Zardari has been sworn in as the President of Pakistan.
Revised:  Asif Ali Zardari has been sworn in as the President of Pakistan.
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Original:  The 53-year-old Asif Zardari took oath from Chief Justice Abdul Hameed Dogar here in Islamabad on Tuesday.
Revised:  The 53-year-old Asif Zardari took oath from Chief Justice Abdul Hameed Dogar in Islamabad on Tuesday.
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Original:  He took  oath as the 12th President of Pakistan.
Revised:  He took the oath as the 12th President of Pakistan.
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Original:  He took  oath as the 12th President of Pakistan.
Revised:  He took oath as the twelfth President of Pakistan.
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Original:  On September 6, 2008 Asif Ali Zardari, secured 479 votes from the total number of 702 votes of the electoral college consisting of two houses of the parliament and four provincial assemblies.
Revised:  On Sept. 6, 2008 Asif Ali Zardari, secured 479 votes from the total number of 702 votes of the electoral college consisting of two houses of the parliament and four provincial assemblies.
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Original:  On September 6, 2008 Asif Ali Zardari, secured 479 votes from the total number of 702 votes of the electoral college consisting of two houses of the parliament and four provincial assemblies.
Revised:  On September 6, Zardari, secured 479 votes from the total number of 702 votes of the electoral college consisting of two houses of the parliament and four provincial assemblies.
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Original:  The election was called after former Prime Minister Pervez Musharraf resigned last month.
Revised:  The election was called after former President Pervez Musharraf resigned last month.
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Original: The LHC is a 27 kilometer long circular high energy particle accelerator  took more than 20 years and USD $9 billion to build.
Revised: The LHC is a 27 kilometer long circular high energy particle accelerator which took more than 20 years and USD $9 billion to build.
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Original:  Physicists hope that ILC might be able to resolve some of the questions raised by Einstein ’ s theories of relativity
Revised:  Physicists hope that ILC might be able to resolve some of the questions raised by Einstein ??? s theories of relativity
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Original:  Physicists hope that ILC might be able to resolve some of the questions raised by Einstein ??? s theories of relativity
Revised:  Physicists hope that ILC might be able to resolve some of the questions raised by Einstein ' s theories of relativity
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Original:  Physicists hope that ILC might be able to resolve some of the questions raised by Einstein's theories of relativity  
Revised:  Physicists hope that ILC might be able to resolve some of the questions raised by Einstein's theories of relativity . 
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Original: The Large Hadron Collider (LHC) that started preliminary experiments on September 10, 2008 in CERN, Geneva, and the planned International Linear Collider (ILC) will carry out a series of experiments in  future to validate the standard model of particle physics.
Revised: The Large Hadron Collider (LHC) that started preliminary experiments on September 10, 2008 in CERN, Geneva, and the planned International Linear Collider (ILC) will carry out a series of experiments in the future to validate the standard model of particle physics.
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Original:  It says Japan was then hit by a magnitude 6.9 earthquake approximately 20 minutes later , then a further magnitude 5.4 aftershock hit the same area of Japan 10 minutes after that .
Revised:  It says Japan was then hit by a magnitude 6.9 earthquake approximately 20 minutes later , then a further magnitude 5.4 aftershock hit the same area of Japan 10 minutes later .
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Original:  The Japan quakes are reported to have occurred near Hokkaido island in Northern Japan
Revised:  The Japan quakes occurred just off the coast of Hokkaido island in Northern Japan
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Original: Three powerful earthquakes are reported to have occurred on Thursday morning just after midnight UTC, one in Indonesia and two in Japan.
Revised: Three powerful earthquakes occurred on Thursday morning just after midnight UTC, one in Indonesia and two in Japan.
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Original:  The Japan quakes occurred just off the  coast of Hokkaido island in Northern Japan  
Revised:  The Japan quakes occurred just off the coast of Hokkaido island in Northern Japan . 
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Original:  The USGS reports the Indonesia earthquake as being centred 2460km ENE of Jakarta, in the Molucca Islands.
Revised:  The USGS reports the Indonesia earthquake as being centred 2460km ENE of Jakarta, in the Moluccas Islands.
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Original: Two powerful earthquakes occurred on Thursday morning just after midnight UTC, one in Indonesia and two in Japan.
Revised: Two powerful earthquakes occurred on Thursday morning just after midnight UTC, one in Indonesia and one in Japan.
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Original: Two powerful earthquakes occurred on Thursday morning just after midnight UTC, one in Indonesia and one in Japan.
Revised: Two powerful earthquakes occurred on Thursday morning just after midnight UTC, one in Indonesia and two in Japan.
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