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Original:  By then, World War II (1939–45) had begun, to which he stayed and worked in England , taking an active part in student politics and in the agitation for colonial freedom .
Revised:  By then, World War II (1939–45) had begun, to which he stayed and worked in England .
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Original: The term perspective has a unique meaning in the context of pharmacoeconomics . Perspective refers to the economic vantage point that is being taken in the analysis.
Revised: Perspective in pharmacoeconomics refers to the economic vantage point that is being taken in the analysis.
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Original:  When deciding on the list of costs or resource expenditures that will be included in the analysis, the author must consider those that are relevant.
Revised:  When deciding on the list of costs or resource expenditures that will be considered relevant to the analysis.
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Original:  Lost wages from work due to illness would not be relevant to an insitutional perspective, since these don't represent expenditures an average institution (e.g. hospital) will incur.
Revised:  Lost wages from work due to illness would not be relevant to an insitutional perspective, since these do not represent expenditures an average institution (e.g. hospital) will incur.
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Original:  From a soceital perspective, they would need to be included.
Revised:  From a societal perspective, they would need to be included.
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Original:  Lost productivity due to illness has an impact on society at-large and must therefore be included and properly value
Revised:  Lost productivity due to illness has an impact on society at large and must therefore be included and properly value
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Original: Five general perspectives that are ofen cited in pharmacoeconomics include: institutional, third party, patient, governmental and societal.
Revised: Five general perspectives that are often cited in pharmacoeconomics include: institutional, third party, patient, governmental and societal.
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Original:  Other relevant costs might include: inventory carrying cost, pharmacy time to compound or dispense, nursing time to administer, disposables (e.g. medication cups or intraveous tubing) and even allocated hospital overhead costs.
Revised:  Other relevant costs might include: inventory carrying cost, pharmacy time to compound or dispense, nursing time to administer, disposables (e.g. medication cups or intravenous tubing) and even allocated hospital overhead costs.
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Original:  Lost wages from work due to illness would not be relevant to an insitutional perspective, since these do not represent expenditures an average institution (e.g. hospital) will incur.
Revised:  Lost wages from work due to illness would not be relevant to an institutional perspective, since these do not represent expenditures an average institution (e.g. hospital) will incur.
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Original: Perspective in pharmacoeconomics refers to the economic vantage point that is being taken in a pharmacoeconomic analysis, such as a cost-effectiveness analysis or cost-utility analysis.
Revised: Perspective in pharmacoeconomics refers to the economic vantage point of a pharmacoeconomic analysis, such as a cost-effectiveness analysis or cost-utility analysis.
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Original:  This will affect the types of costs (resource expenditures) and benefits that will be considered relevant to the analysis.
Revised:  This affects the types of costs (resource expenditures) and benefits that will be considered relevant to the analysis.
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Original:  This will affect the types of costs (resource expenditures) and benefits that will be considered relevant to the analysis.
Revised:  This will affect the types of costs (resource expenditures) and benefits that are relevant to the analysis.
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Original:  Five general perspectives that are often cited in pharmacoeconomics include: institutional, third party, patient, governmental and societal.
Revised:  Five general perspectives are often cited in pharmacoeconomics include: institutional, third party, patient, governmental and societal.
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Original:  Five general perspectives that are often cited in pharmacoeconomics include: institutional, third party, patient, governmental and societal.
Revised:  Five general perspectives that are often cited in pharmacoeconomics , including institutional, third party, patient, governmental and societal.
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Original:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study is done from the institutional perspective, the medication cost would be relevant to the resource expenditures involved in the delivery of the therapy . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, then it would be included.
Revised:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study takes the institutional perspective, the medication cost would be relevant to the resource expenditures involved in the delivery of the therapy . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, then it would be included.
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Original:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study is done from the institutional perspective, the medication cost would be relevant to the resource expenditures involved in the delivery of the therapy . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, then it would be included.
Revised:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study is done from the institutional perspective, medication cost would be relevant to the resource expenditures involved in the delivery of the therapy . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, then it would be included.
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Original:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study is done from the institutional perspective, the medication cost would be relevant to the resource expenditures involved in the delivery of the therapy . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, then it would be included.
Revised:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study is done from the institutional perspective, the medication cost would be relevant to resource expenditures involved in the delivery of the therapy . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, then it would be included.
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Original:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study is done from the institutional perspective, the medication cost would be relevant to the resource expenditures involved in the delivery of the therapy . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, then it would be included.
Revised:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study is done from the institutional perspective, the medication cost would be relevant to the resource expenditures involved in therapy delivery . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, then it would be included.
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Original:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study is done from the institutional perspective, the medication cost would be relevant to the resource expenditures involved in the delivery of the therapy . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, then it would be included.
Revised:  If, for example, a pharmacoeconomic study is done from the institutional perspective, the medication cost would be relevant to the resource expenditures involved in the delivery of the therapy . Since the institution (e.g. hospital) incurs this expense, it would be included.
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Original:  Other relevant costs might include : inventory carrying cost, pharmacy time to compound or dispense, nursing time to administer, disposables (e.g. medication cups or intravenous tubing) and even allocated hospital overhead costs.
Revised:  Other relevant costs include inventory carrying cost, pharmacy time to compound or dispense, nursing time to administer, disposables (e.g. medication cups or intravenous tubing) and even allocated hospital overhead costs.
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Original:  Other relevant costs might include : inventory carrying cost, pharmacy time to compound or dispense, nursing time to administer, disposables (e.g. medication cups or intravenous tubing) and even allocated hospital overhead costs.
Revised:  Other relevant costs might include : inventory carrying cost, pharmacy time to compound or dispense, nursing time to administer, disposables (e.g. medication cups or intravenous tubing) and allocated hospital overhead costs.
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Original:  The next component of perspective that needs to be addressed under perspective is valuation.
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Original:  Valuation defines the currency reference that will be used to represent the resource expenditure associated with a given cost.
Revised:  Valuation defines the currency reference that represents the resource expenditure associated with a given cost.
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Original:  When it comes time to determine the actual "dollar amount" to be attributed to the medication , it needs to be consistent with the perspective as well.
Revised:  The actual "dollar amount" to be attributed to the medication , it needs to be consistent with the perspective as well.
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Original:  When it comes time to determine the actual "dollar amount" to be attributed to the medication , it needs to be consistent with the perspective as well.
Revised:  When it comes time to determine the actual "dollar amount" to be attributed to the medication needs to be consistent with the perspective as well.
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Original:  Average wholesaler price (AWP) might NOT be considered an appropriate valuation of medication cost from an institutional perspective, if it does not represent the true cost to the institution.
Revised:  Average wholesaler price (AWP) might not be considered an appropriate valuation of medication cost from an institutional perspective, if it does not represent the true cost to the institution.
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Original:  Average wholesaler price (AWP) might NOT be considered an appropriate valuation of medication cost from an institutional perspective, if it does not represent the true cost to the institution.
Revised:  Average wholesaler price (AWP) might NOT be considered an appropriate valuation of medication cost from an institutional perspective, if it does not represent the cost to the institution.
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Original:  Average acquisition cost would be more relevant as a medication cost valuation .
Revised:  Average acquisition cost would be more relevant .
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Original:  More complex perspectives may require broader stables of resource expenditures (costs ) and more intricate valuations.
Revised:  More complex perspectives may require broader consideration of costs and more sophisticated valuations.
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Original:  For example, in the "societal" perspective, it is necessary for the author to consider additional costs that would not be relevant to a given institutional perspective.
Revised:  For example, in the "societal" perspective, it is necessary for the author to consider costs that would not be relevant to a given institutional perspective.
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Original:  One such example includes "lost productivity ". Lost wages from work due to illness would not be relevant to an institutional perspective, since these do not represent expenditures an average institution (e.g. hospital) will incur.
Revised:  Examples include lost productivity and lost wages due to illness would not be relevant to an institutional perspective, since these do not represent expenditures an average institution (e.g. hospital) will incur.
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Original:  Other relevant costs include inventory carrying cost, pharmacy time to compound or dispense, nursing time to administer, disposables (e.g. medication cups or intravenous tubing) and allocated hospital overhead costs . Valuation defines the currency reference that represents the resource expenditure associated with a given cost.
Revised:  Other relevant costs include inventory carrying cost, pharmacy time to compound or dispense, nursing time to administer, disposables (e.g. medication cups or intravenous tubing) and allocated hospital overhead costs Valuation defines the currency reference that represents the resource expenditure associated with a given cost.
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Original: It is arguable , however, that this is the traditional approach of historians and scientists to information sources, and that what is new is the speed and ease at which the cross-referencing and elaboration can be done, the media forms that are used, and the amount of time invested in multi-source research by the non-specialized population.
Revised: It is arguable however, that this is the traditional approach of historians and scientists to information sources, and that what is new is the speed and ease at which the cross-referencing and elaboration can be done, the media forms that are used, and the amount of time invested in multi-source research by the non-specialized population.
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Original:  "Meshing" may also be used to describe the activities of an information provider, when they intentionally encourage consumer engagement in multiple forms of information exchange related to a product or organization, as in an integrated- or multi-media advertising campaign.
Revised:  "Meshing" may also be used to describe the activities of an information provider, when they intentionally encourage consumer engagement in multiple pieces or channels of information exchange related to a product or organization, as in an integrated- or multi-media advertising campaign.
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Original:  "Meshing" may also be used to describe the activities of an information provider, when they intentionally encourage consumer engagement in multiple forms of information exchange related to a product or organization, as in an integrated- or multi-media advertising campaign.
Revised:  "Meshing" may also be used to describe the activities of an information provider, when they intentionally encourage consumer engagement in multiple forms of information exchange related to a product or organization, as in an integrated advertising campaign.
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Original:  When the participants themselves choose the forms, sources and specific items of media that they use to enhance or disassemble the first piece of media they encounter, especially when these are perceived to be mostly independent sources, the result is an enriched self-discovery experience with a level of engagement not possible from even the most well designed guided experiences.
Revised:  When the participants themselves choose the channels, pieces, sources, and specific items of media that they use to enhance or disassemble the first piece of media they encounter, especially when these are perceived to be mostly independent sources, the result is an enriched self-discovery experience with a level of engagement not possible from even the most well designed guided experiences.
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Original:  Meshing goes beyond simply mutually inclusive public relations across media forms and product placement;
Revised:  Meshing goes beyond simply mutually inclusive public relations across media channels, pieces, and product placement;
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Original:  It is arguable, however, that this is the traditional approach of historians and scientists to information sources, and that what is new is the speed and ease at which the cross-referencing and elaboration can be done , the media forms that are used, and the amount of time invested in multi-source research by the non-specialized population.
Revised:  It is arguable, however, that this is the traditional approach of historians and scientists to information sources, and that what is new is the speed and ease at which the cross-referencing and elaboration can be done from the media delivery and display technology that is used, and the amount of time invested in multi-source research by the non-specialized population.
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Original:  a five second headline on the evening news turns into four hours of deep multi-source coverage and 14 hours of discussion online Just for fun becomes personal entertainment - try correcting a few pages in wikipedia for fun, for example read stories in magazines and newspapers, then go online to get multiple angles on the same stories watch a reality TV show, then go online to get character bios, behind-the-scenes information
Revised:  a five second headline on the evening news turns into four hours of deep multi-source coverage and 14 hours of discussion online Just for fun becomes personal entertainment - try correcting a few pages in Wikipedia for fun, for example read stories in magazines and newspapers, then go online to get multiple angles on the same stories watch a reality TV show, then go online to get character bios, behind-the-scenes information
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Original: After leaving Warner, Zappa ended the 1970s by releasing two of his most important projects in 1979.
Revised: After leaving Warner, Zappa released two of his most important projects in 1979.
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Original: Frank Vincent Zappa (December 21, 1940 – December 4, 1993) was an American musician,  composer, songwriter, and bandleader.
Revised: Frank Vincent Zappa (December 21, 1940 – December 4, 1993) was an American musician, singer, composer, songwriter, and bandleader.
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Original:  In their place, Zappa and Cohen created DiscReet Records, also distributed by Warner Bros . Zappa continued a high rate of production through the first half of the 1970s, including the solo album Apostrophe (') (1974), which reached a career-high No. 10 on the Billboard pop album charts helped by the No. 86 chart hit "Don't Eat The Yellow Snow".
Revised:  In their place, Zappa and Cohen created DiscReet Records, also distributed by Warner . Zappa continued a high rate of production through the first half of the 1970s, including the solo album Apostrophe (') (1974), which reached a career-high No. 10 on the Billboard pop album charts helped by the No. 86 chart hit "Don't Eat The Yellow Snow".
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Original:  Zappa therefore took his personal master copies of the rock-oriented Zoot Allures (1976) directly to Warner Bros. , thereby bypassing DiscReet.
Revised:  Zappa therefore took his personal master copies of the rock-oriented Zoot Allures (1976) directly to Warner , thereby bypassing DiscReet.
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Original:  Although Zappa eventually gained the rights to all his material created under the MGM and Warner Bros. contracts, the various lawsuits meant that for a period Zappa's only income came from touring, which he therefore did extensively in 1975–1977 with relatively small, mainly rock-oriented, bands.
Revised:  Although Zappa eventually gained the rights to all his material created under the MGM and Warner contracts, the various lawsuits meant that for a period Zappa's only income came from touring, which he therefore did extensively in 1975–1977 with relatively small, mainly rock-oriented, bands.
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Original:  After leaving Warner, Zappa released two of his most important projects in 1979.
Revised:  Zappa released two of his most important projects in 1979.
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Original:  He began writing classical music in high school, while at the same time playing drums in rhythm and blues bands, later switching to electric guitar.
Revised:  He began writing classical music in high school, while at the same time playing drums in rhythm-and-blues bands, later switching to electric guitar.
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Original:  Unlike many other rock musicians of his generation, he disapproved of recreational use of drugs  but supported decriminalization and regulation.
Revised:  Unlike many other rock musicians of his generation, he disapproved of recreational use of drugs , but supported decriminalization and regulation.
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Original:  Digital medium and last tour Around 1986, Zappa undertook a comprehensive re-release program of his earlier vinyl recordings.
Revised: Merchandising Zappa’s mail-order merchandise business Barfko-Swill was run by Gerry Fialka, who also worked for Zappa as archivist and production assistant from 1983 to 1993 and answered the phone for Zappa’s Barking Pumpkin Records hotline. Fialka appears giving a tour of Barfko-Swill in the 1987 VHS release (but not the original 1979 film release) of Zappa's film Baby Snakes. While not listed in the film credits, he is credited on-screen as "GERALD FIALKA Cool Guy Who Wraps Stuff So It Doesn't Break". A short clip of this appearance is also included in the 2020 documentary film Zappa. Digital medium and last tour Around 1986, Zappa undertook a comprehensive re-release program of his earlier vinyl recordings.
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Original:   Procedure A modified test can be performed using proprietary agents which requires fewer steps and allows the sample to be fixed quicker . Eponym It is named after Arnault Tzanck (1886–1954), a French dermatologist .
Revised:  Procedure A modified test can be performed using proprietary agents which requires fewer steps and allows the sample to be fixed quicker Eponym It is named after Arnault Tzanck (1886–1954), a French dermatologist .
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Original:   Procedure A modified test can be performed using proprietary agents which requires fewer steps and allows the sample to be fixed quicker . Eponym It is named after Arnault Tzanck (1886–1954), a French dermatologist .
Revised:  Procedure A modified test can be performed using proprietary agents which requires fewer steps and allows the sample to be fixed quicker . .
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Original:  It is a simple, low-cost, and rapid office based testDurdu M. , Cutaneous Cytology and Tzanck Smear Test, Springer, 2019, URL
Revised:  It is a simple, low-cost, and rapid office based test.
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Original: 9\% sensitive and 57.9  specificViral infectionsHerpetic infectionsAcantholytic cells, multinucleated giant cells and eosinophilic inclusion bodies53.1 -
Revised: 9\% sensitive and 57.9 \% specificViral infectionsHerpetic infectionsAcantholytic cells, multinucleated giant cells and eosinophilic inclusion bodies53.1 -
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Original:  absence of acantholytic cells172\% sensitive ,
Revised:  absence of acantholytic cells172\% sensitive and
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Original:  100\% specificHuman papillomavirus infectionsKoilocytes75\% sensitivity and 100\% specificityMolluscum contagiosumIntracytoplasmic inclusion bodies (“Henderson-Patterson’
Revised:  100\% specificHuman papillomavirus infectionsKoilocytes75\% sensitive and 100\% specificityMolluscum contagiosumIntracytoplasmic inclusion bodies (“Henderson-Patterson’
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Original:  100\% specificHuman papillomavirus infectionsKoilocytes75\% sensitivity and 100\% specificityMolluscum contagiosumIntracytoplasmic inclusion bodies (“Henderson-Patterson’
Revised:  100\% specificHuman papillomavirus infectionsKoilocytes75\% sensitivity and 100\% specificMolluscum contagiosumIntracytoplasmic inclusion bodies (“Henderson-Patterson’
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Original: s bodies”)Milker’s nodule and orfIntracytoplasmic inclusion bodies (“Guarnieri’s bodies”)Parasitic infectionsLeishmaniasisEllipsoid-shaped Leishman-Donovan bodie30-82.6 \% sensitive and 100\% specificDemodicosisMore than 5 Demodex mites/cm2The diagnostic value of cytology for diagnosing demodex folliculitis is higher than that of histopathology.
Revised: s bodies”)Milker’s nodule and orfIntracytoplasmic inclusion bodies (“Guarnieri’s bodies”)Parasitic infectionsLeishmaniasisEllipsoid-shaped Leishman-Donovan bodie30 - 82.6 \% sensitive and 100\% specificDemodicosisMore than 5 Demodex mites/cm2The diagnostic value of cytology for diagnosing demodex folliculitis is higher than that of histopathology.
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