wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Macewen 's operation is an operation for the radical cure of inguinal hernia, discovered by Scottish surgeon Sir William Macewen (1864-1924).
Revised: MacEwen 's operation is an operation for the radical cure of inguinal hernia, discovered by Scottish surgeon Sir William Macewen (1864-1924).
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Original: Macewen's operation is an operation for the radical cure of inguinal hernia, discovered by Scottish surgeon Sir William Macewen (1864-1924).
Revised: Macewen's operation is an operation for the cure of inguinal hernia, discovered by Scottish surgeon Sir William Macewen (1864-1924).
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Original:  It is performed by closing the internal ring with a pad made of the hernial sac. 
Revised:  It is performed by closing the internal ring with a pad made of the hernial sac. References
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Original: Prospective studies have shown that , it is useful in predicting short term prognosis especially mortality within 30 days.
Revised: Prospective studies have shown that it is useful in predicting short term prognosis especially mortality within 30 days.
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Original:  Corticosteroid therapy or pentoxifylline have be used with mixed results for patients whose increased mortality is indicated with a value greater than 32.
Revised:  Corticosteroid therapy or pentoxifylline have been used with mixed results for patients whose increased mortality is indicated with a value greater than 32.
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Original: Maddrey discriminant function  (DF) is the traditional model for evaluating the severity and prognosis in alcoholic hepatitis and evaluates the efficacy of using alcoholic hepatitis steroid treatment.
Revised: Maddrey discriminant function ' (DF) is the traditional model for evaluating the severity and prognosis in alcoholic hepatitis and evaluates the efficacy of using alcoholic hepatitis steroid treatment.
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Original:  The subject's Maddrey DF scored is determined by blood analysis.
Revised:  The subject's Maddrey DF score is determined by blood analysis.
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Original:  The modified Maddrey's discriminant function ) was originally described by Maddrey and Boitnott to predict prognosis in alcoholic hepatitis.
Revised:  The modified Maddrey's discriminant function was originally described by Maddrey and Boitnott to predict prognosis in alcoholic hepatitis.
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Original: File:StateLibQld 1 162315 Irene and Cecil Harveyson posing in their backyard in Ashgrove, Brisbane, ca. 1929.jpg|A back yard in Brisbane, Queensland, Australia in 1929]] File:Harvey LA back yard 2.jpg|Back yard of a house in Harvey, Louisiana, United States A backyard, or back yard, is a yard at the back of a house, common in suburban developments in the Western world.
Revised: File:StateLibQld 1 162315 Irene and Cecil Harveyson posing in their backyard in Ashgrove, Brisbane, ca. 1929.jpg|A back yard in Brisbane, Queensland, Australia in 1929]] A backyard, or back yard, is a yard at the back of a house, common in suburban developments in the Western world.
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Original:  People posing at a backyard party in Canada|left Depending on the size of the backyard, it may have any number of items (or none), such as: 
Revised:  People posing at a backyard party in Canada|left Depending on the size of the backyard, it may have any number of items (or none), such as: Gallery
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Original: File:StateLibQld 1 162315 Irene and Cecil Harveyson posing in their backyard in Ashgrove, Brisbane, ca. 1929.jpg|A back yard in Brisbane, Queensland, Australia in 1929]] File:Backyard in Tampere, Finland.jpg|A backyardof house in Tampere, Finland A backyard, or back yard, is a yard at the back of a house, common in suburban developments in the Western world.
Revised: File:StateLibQld 1 162315 Irene and Cecil Harveyson posing in their backyard in Ashgrove, Brisbane, ca. 1929.jpg|A back yard in Brisbane, Queensland, Australia in 1929]] A backyard, or back yard, is a yard at the back of a house, common in suburban developments in the Western world.
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Original: File:StateLibQld 1 162315 Irene and Cecil Harveyson posing in their backyard in Ashgrove, Brisbane, ca. 1929.jpg|A back yard in Brisbane, Queensland, Australia in 1929]] File:Backyard in Tampere, Finland.jpg|A backyardof house in Tampere, Finland A backyard, or back yard, is a yard at the back of a house, common in suburban developments in the Western world.
Revised: File:StateLibQld 1 162315 Irene and Cecil Harveyson posing in their backyard in Ashgrove, Brisbane, ca. 1929.jpg|A back yard in Brisbane, Queensland, Australia in 1929]] File:Backyard in Tampere, Finland.jpg|A backyardof house in Tampere, Finland A backyard, or back yard, is a yard at the back of a house, common in suburban developments in the Western world.
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Original: Richie Barnett (born 21 April 1972 in Auckland, New Zealand ) is a  former professional rugby league footballer of the 1990s and 2000s.
Revised: Richie Barnett (born 21 April 1972 ) is a former professional rugby league footballer of the 1990s and 2000s.
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Original: Richie Barnett (born 21 April 1972) is a New Zealand former professional rugby league footballer of the 1990s and 2000s.
Revised: Richie Barnett (born 21 April 1972) is a New Zealand former professional rugby league footballer who played in the 1990s and 2000s.
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Original:  A New Zealand national representative , he also captained the side during his career, during which he played for clubs in New Zealand, Australia and England.
Revised:  A New Zealand international representative , he also captained the side during his career, during which he played for clubs in New Zealand, Australia and England.
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Original: Richie Barnett (born 21 April 1972 ) is a New Zealand former professional rugby league footballer who played in the 1990s and 2000s.
Revised: Richie Barnett (born 21 April 1971 ) is a New Zealand former professional rugby league footballer who played in the 1990s and 2000s.
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Original:  It also allows to assess environmental burdens through economic activities of a nation or to determine how material intensive an economy is.
Revised:  It also allows to assess environmental burdens associated with the economic activities of a nation or to determine how material intensive an economy is.
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Original:  It also allows to assess environmental burdens through economic activities of a nation or to determine how material intensive an economy is.
Revised:  It also allows to assess environmental burdens through economic activities of a nation and to determine how material intensive an economy is.
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Original:  Research on MFA is strong in Germany, Austria and the United States.
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Original:  The following indicators are commonly used in material flow accounting to measure the resource efficiency of a country or region : Domestic Material Input (DMI) summarizes the domestic extraction of reources and the imports, but excludes the indirect flows associated with the domestic extraction, since they are sometimes difficult to quantify.
Revised:  In addition, the following indicators are commonly used in material flow accounting to measure the resource efficiency of a country or region : Domestic Material Input (DMI) summarizes the domestic extraction of reources and the imports, but excludes the indirect flows associated with the domestic extraction, since they are sometimes difficult to quantify.
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Original:  The following indicators are commonly used in material flow accounting to measure the resource efficiency of a country or region : Domestic Material Input (DMI) summarizes the domestic extraction of reources and the imports, but excludes the indirect flows associated with the domestic extraction, since they are sometimes difficult to quantify.
Revised:  The following indicators are may be used in material flow accounting to measure the resource efficiency of a country or region : Domestic Material Input (DMI) summarizes the domestic extraction of reources and the imports, but excludes the indirect flows associated with the domestic extraction, since they are sometimes difficult to quantify.
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Original:  The following indicators are commonly used in material flow accounting to measure the resource efficiency of a country or region : Domestic Material Input (DMI) summarizes the domestic extraction of reources and the imports, but excludes the indirect flows associated with the domestic extraction, since they are sometimes difficult to quantify.
Revised:  The following indicators are commonly used in material flow accounting : Domestic Material Input (DMI) summarizes the domestic extraction of reources and the imports, but excludes the indirect flows associated with the domestic extraction, since they are sometimes difficult to quantify.
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Original:  The following indicators are commonly used in material flow accounting to measure the resource efficiency of a country or region : Domestic Material Input (DMI) summarizes the domestic extraction of reources and the imports, but excludes the indirect flows associated with the domestic extraction, since they are sometimes difficult to quantify.
Revised:  The following indicators are commonly used in material flow accounting to measure the resource efficiency of a country or region : 
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Original:  Direct Material Consumption (DMC): this indicator accounts all materials that are consumed within or remain in the domestic environment.
Revised:  Hidden Flows are materials that are consumed within or remain in the domestic environment.
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Original: OECD Glossary URL Net Addition to Stocks (NAS) , the materials that are neither released to the domestic environment nor exported, but contribute to a physical increase of the economic processing system itself, e.g. infrastructure, buildings, machinery or other durable goods.
Revised: OECD Glossary URL Net Addition to Stocks (NAS) , the materials that are embodied in traded products ( e.g. infrastructure, buildings, machinery or other durable goods.
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Original:  In order to highlight the similarity to natural metabolic processes, the terms “industrial” or “societal” metabolism have been introduced.
Revised:  In order to highlight the similarity to natural metabolic processes, the terms "industrial" or "societal" metabolism have been introduced.
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Original:  It is very important to note that MFA seeks to provide a complete picture of an economy ’ s material use so that materials are included in these accounts irrespective of whether or not they have direct market value.
Revised:  It is very important to note that MFA seeks to provide a complete picture of an economy ' s material use so that materials are included in these accounts irrespective of whether or not they have direct market value.
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Original:  The Physical Trade Balance (PTB) is a measure of net-imports and is calculated as the difference between imports and exports.
Revised:  The physical trade balance (PTB) is a measure of net-imports and is calculated as the difference between imports and exports.
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Original:  Domestic Material Consumption (DMC) is a measure of apparent consumption and calculated from domestic extraction plus imports minus exports (or DE plus PTB).
Revised:  Domestic material consumption (DMC) is a measure of apparent consumption and calculated from domestic extraction plus imports minus exports (or DE plus PTB).
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Original:  More information on how the statistics are collected, under what legal framework and how they are defined is available on Economy-wide material flow accounts.
Revised:  More information on how the statistics are collected, under what legal framework and how they are defined is available in Economy-wide material flow accounts.
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Original:  Hidden Flows are materials that are extracted or moved, but do not enter the economy.
Revised:  Hidden flows are materials that are extracted or moved, but do not enter the economy.
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Original:  Domestic Processed Output (DPO) is defined by the OECD as "the total mass of materials which have been used in the national economy, before flowing into the environment.
Revised:  Domestic processed output (DPO) is defined by the OECD as "the total mass of materials which have been used in the national economy, before flowing into the environment.
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Original: OECD Glossary URL Total Domestic Output (TDO) includes the domestic processed output (DPO) plus the hidden flows associated with the domestic production.
Revised: OECD Glossary URL Total domestic output (TDO) includes the domestic processed output (DPO) plus the hidden flows associated with the domestic production.
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Original:  Raw Material Consumption (RMC) includes the raw materials that are embodied in traded products (e.g. metal ores from which metals have been extracted).
Revised:  Raw material consumption (RMC) includes the raw materials that are embodied in traded products (e.g. metal ores from which metals have been extracted).
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Original:  RMC does not include hidden URL RMC is most commonly calculated via environmentally extended input-output analysis.
Revised:  RMC does not include hidden URL RMC is most commonly calculated via environmentally extended input–output analysis.
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Original: Wereka and Batwin (or Ouerkas and Bathouses) were two of several Christian Gothic martyrs burned alive in church by  the local district royal officer and sacred pontiff, otherwise known as goði , *Wingureiks (or Wingourichos, or Jungerik) in the 370s.
Revised: Wereka and Batwin (or Ouerkas and Bathouses) were two of several Christian Gothic martyrs burned alive in church by the local district royal officer and sacred pontiff, otherwise known as goði in the 370s.
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Original:  Heather and Matthews, Goths in the Fourth Century, p. 119.
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Original:  Wereka and Batwin are named in both Gothic and Greek sources, but the persecutor (Wingourichos), the other martyrs, and the others, are only named in Greek sources, which may err slightly in their transliteration of Gothic names.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% They were recognized as saints, with a feast day of March 26 in the Arian calendar, and October 23 in a Gothic calendar.
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Original:  See also Germanic Christianity%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:370s deaths Category:Gothic people Category:Saints duos Category:4th-century Christian martyrs Category:4th-century Arian Christians
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:370s deaths Category:Gothic people Category:Saints duos Category:4th-century Christian martyrs Category:4th-century Arian Christians
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Original:  AIIM Market Intelligence Weekend Project: Create a Paperless Linux Office | Linux.com
Revised:  AIIM Market Intelligence 
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Original:  Many document management systems include the ability to read documents via optical character recognition and use that data within the document management system ’ s framework.
Revised:  Many document management systems include the ability to read documents via optical character recognition and use that data within the document management system ' s framework.
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Original: Paper product manufacturing contributes significantly to deforestation and man-made climate change, and produces greenhouse gases.
Revised: Some believe that paper product manufacturing contributes significantly to deforestation and man-made climate change, and produces greenhouse gases.
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Original:  Although measures such as recycling and using tree-free paper can help reduce the environmental impact of paper , most paper still ends up in landfills.
Revised:  Although measures such as recycling can help reduce the environmental impact of paper , most paper still ends up in landfills.
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Original:  Paper production also leads to air pollution , as paper manufacturing releases nitrogen dioxide (NO2), sulfur dioxide (SO2), and carbon dioxide (CO2).
Revised:  Paper production also leads to air pollution with the release of nitrogen dioxide (NO2), sulfur dioxide (SO2), and carbon dioxide (CO2).
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Original:  Nitrogen dioxide and sulfur dioxide are major contributors to acid rain, whereas CO2 is a greenhouse gas responsible for climate change.
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Original:  The concept can be extended to communications outside the office as well.
Revised:  The concept can be extended to communications outside the office as ygnhfmnyhhjm
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Original:  Paperless office systems are easier to secure than traditional filing cabinets, and can track individual accesses to each document.
Revised:  Paperless office systems are easier to secure than traditional filing URL and can track individual accesses to each document.
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Original:  Paperless office systems are easier to secure than traditional filing URL and can track individual accesses to each document.
Revised:  Paperless office systems are easier to secure than traditional filing cabinets, and can track individual accesses to each document.
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Original: British General Frederick Lugard used rivalries between many of the emirs in the south and the central Sokoto administration to prevent any defence as he worked toward the capital.
Revised: British colonial administraton Frederick Lugard exploited rivalries between many of the emirs in the south and the central Sokoto administration to prevent any defence as he worked toward the capital.
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Original: British General Frederick Lugard used rivalries between many of the emirs in the south and the central Sokoto administration to prevent any defence as he worked toward the capital.
Revised: British General Frederick Lugard used rivalries between many of the emirs in the south and the central Sokoto administration to counter possible defence efforts as his men marched toward the capital.
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Original:  The British forces won , sending Attahiru I and thousands of followers on a Mahdist hijra.
Revised:  The British emerged triumphant , sending Attahiru I and thousands of followers on a Mahdist hijra.
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Original:  The Hausa Northern (eternal) Knot or 'Dagin Arewa', a traditional symbolic indicator of Hausa identity On 13 March 1903 at the grand market square of Sokoto, the last Vizier of the Caliphate officially conceded to British Rule .
Revised:  The Hausa Northern (eternal) Knot or 'Dagin Arewa', a traditional symbolic indicator of Hausa identity On 13 March 1903 at the grand market square of Sokoto, the last Vizier of the Caliphate officially conceded to British rule .
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Original:  In June 1903, the British defeated the remaining forces of Attahiru I and killed him  ;
Revised:  In June 1903, the British defeated the remaining forces of Attahiru I , who was ;
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Original:  The area of the Sokoto Caliphate was divided among the control of the British, French, and Germans under the terms of their Berlin Conference.
Revised:  The area of the Sokoto Caliphate was divided among the control of the British, French, and Germans under the terms of the Berlin Conference.
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Original:  They surprised the British  , who had expected the Hausa to turn to cotton production.
Revised:  They surprised the British authorities , who had expected the Hausa to turn to cotton production.
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Original:  The Boko script was imposed on the Hausa by the British and French colonial forces and made the official Hausa alphabet in 1930.
Revised:  The Boko script was implemented by the British and French colonial forces and made the official Hausa alphabet in 1930.
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Original:  The Boko script was imposed on the Hausa by the British and French colonial forces and made the official Hausa alphabet in 1930.
Revised:  The Boko script was imposed on the Hausa by the British and French colonial authorities and made the official Hausa alphabet in 1930.
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Original: Other Hausa have mixed with ethnic groups southwards such as the Yoruba of old Oyo, Nupe and Igbirra in the northern fringes of the forest belt and in similar fashion to their Sahelian neighbors have heavily influenced the cultures of these groups.
Revised: Other Hausa have mixed with ethnic groups southwards and in similar fashion to their Sahelian neighbors have heavily influenced the cultures of these groups.
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Original:  "Hausa-Fulani or Kado" are Hausanized Hausas , people of mixed Hausa and Fulani origin, most of whom speak a variant of Hausa as their native language.
Revised:  "Hausa-Fulani or Kado" are Hausanized Fulas , people of mixed Hausa and Fulani origin, most of whom speak a variant of Hausa as their native language.
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Original:  They include Wangarawa, Gobirawa, Rumawa, Maouri, and others.
Revised:  They include Gobirawa, Rumawa, Maouri, and others.
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Original:  The essence of the Fick principle is that blood flow to an organ can be calculated using a marker substance if the following information is known: Amount of marker substance taken up by the organ per unit time Concentration of marker substance in arterial blood supplying the organ Concentration of marker substance in venous blood leaving the organ  In Fick's original method, the "organ" was the entire human body and the marker substance was oxygen.
Revised:  The Fick principle states that blood flow to an organ can be calculated using a marker substance if the following information is known: Amount of marker substance taken up by the organ per unit time Concentration of marker substance in arterial blood supplying the organ Concentration of marker substance in venous blood leaving the organ In Fick's original method, the "organ" was the entire human body and the marker substance was oxygen.
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Original:  The first publishing of this was in a conference proceedings from July 9, 1870 from a lecture he gave at that conference NB: summary of his principle is under point (4) of the proceedings.
Revised:  The first published mention was in conference proceedings from July 9, 1870 from a lecture he gave at that conference NB: summary of his principle is under point (4) of the proceedings.
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Original: Variables In Fick's original method, the following variables are measured: - "Indirect Measurement of Cardiac Output" VO2 , oxygen consumption in ml of pure gaseous oxygen per minute.
Revised: Variables In Fick's original method, the following variables are measured: - "Indirect Measurement of Cardiac Output" V̇O2 , oxygen consumption in ml of pure gaseous oxygen per minute.
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Original: 1941—1954 Breen retired from the PCA in April 1941 , announcing that his departure was due to overwork and exhaustion.
Revised: 1941—1954 Breen retired from the PCA in April 1954 , announcing that his departure was due to overwork and exhaustion.
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Original: After his retirement, Breen moved to Phoenix, Arizona  with his wife Mary.
Revised: After his retirement, Breen moved to Phoenix, Arizona , with his wife Mary.
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Original:  He returned to the PCA in 1942.
Revised:  , but returned to the PCA in 1942.
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