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Original:  In response to a recent Swiss implementation of travel restrictions on Gaddafi and his relatives, Libya barred most of Europe from entering , totaling 25 countries  . Last November, the Swiss voted to amend the constitution to prevent the construction of new minarets.
Revised:  In response to a recent Swiss implementation of travel restrictions on Gaddafi and his relatives, Libya barred most of Europe from entering ( totaling 25 countries . Last November, the Swiss voted to amend the constitution to prevent the construction of new minarets.
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Original:  In response to a recent Swiss implementation of travel restrictions on Gaddafi and his relatives, Libya barred most of Europe from entering , totaling 25 countries  . Last November, the Swiss voted to amend the constitution to prevent the construction of new minarets.
Revised:  In response to a recent Swiss implementation of travel restrictions on Gaddafi and his relatives, Libya barred most of Europe from entering , totaling 25 countries ) . Last November, the Swiss voted to amend the constitution to prevent the construction of new minarets.
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Original:  Spain and Italy have been attempting to mediate the dispute since the barring of European entry to Libya , and the European Union has been "working closely with Switzerland to reach a diplomatic solution," and says the timing of Gaddifi's proclamation is "unfortunate ". France and the United Nations said the words were unacceptable.
Revised:  Spain and Italy have been attempting to mediate the dispute since the barring of European entry to Libya . The European Union has been "working closely with Switzerland to reach a diplomatic solution," and says the timing of Gaddifi's proclamation is "unfortunate ". France and the United Nations said the words were unacceptable.
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Original:  Spain and Italy have been attempting to mediate the dispute since the barring of European entry to Libya , and the European Union has been "working closely with Switzerland to reach a diplomatic solution," and says the timing of Gaddifi's proclamation is "unfortunate ". France and the United Nations said the words were unacceptable.
Revised:  Spain and Italy have been attempting to mediate the dispute since the barring of European entry to Libya , and the European Union has been "working closely with Switzerland to reach a diplomatic solution," and says the timing of Gaddifi's proclamation is "unfortunate ." France and the United Nations said the words were unacceptable.
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Original:  Spain and Italy have been attempting to mediate the dispute since the barring of European entry to Libya , and the European Union has been "working closely with Switzerland to reach a diplomatic solution," and says the timing of Gaddifi's proclamation is "unfortunate ". France and the United Nations said the words were unacceptable.
Revised:  Spain and Italy have been attempting to mediate the dispute since the barring of European entry to Libya , and the European Union has been "working closely with Switzerland to reach a diplomatic solution," and says the timing of Gaddifi's proclamation is "unfortunate ". France and the United Nations said Gaddafi's words were unacceptable.
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Original:  "In my opinion, this is a purely political matter between Libya and Switzerland, and has nothing to do with Islam or with Muslims," said the head of the mosque in Geneva , while Yasar Ozdemir of the Swiss Federation of Muslim Associations said he was unsurprised by Gaddafi's "nonsense.
Revised:  "In my opinion, this is a purely political matter between Libya and Switzerland, and has nothing to do with Islam or with Muslims," said the head of the mosque in Geneva . While Yasar Ozdemir of the Swiss Federation of Muslim Associations said he was unsurprised by Gaddafi's "nonsense.
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Original:  ]] Libyan leader Colonel Muammar Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare Jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at Mosques . Libya and Switzerland have been in a diplomatic dispute since the Swiss arrested one of Gaddafi's sons in 2008.
Revised:  ]] Libyan leader Colonel Muammar Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at Mosques . Libya and Switzerland have been in a diplomatic dispute since the Swiss arrested one of Gaddafi's sons in 2008.
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Original:  ]] Libyan leader Colonel Muammar Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare Jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at Mosques . Libya and Switzerland have been in a diplomatic dispute since the Swiss arrested one of Gaddafi's sons in 2008.
Revised:  ]] Libyan leader Colonel Muammar Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare Jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at mosques . Libya and Switzerland have been in a diplomatic dispute since the Swiss arrested one of Gaddafi's sons in 2008.
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Original:  "In my opinion, this is a purely political matter between Libya and Switzerland, and has nothing to do with Islam or with Muslims," said the head of the mosque in  . Yasar Ozdemir of the Swiss Federation of Muslim Associations said he was unsurprised by Gaddafi's "nonsense.
Revised:  "In my opinion, this is a purely political matter between Libya and Switzerland, and has nothing to do with Islam or with Muslims," said the head of the mosque in Geneva . Yasar Ozdemir of the Swiss Federation of Muslim Associations said he was unsurprised by Gaddafi's "nonsense.
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Original: At 06:34 UTC today, an 8.8 magnitude earthquake hit Chile, triggering a tusnami in the Pacific Ocean.
Revised: At 06:34 UTC today, an 8.8 magnitude earthquake hit Chile, triggering a tsunami in the Pacific Ocean.
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Original: Tyson   was released after being given a citation.
Revised: Tyson has a history of criminal behavior and violence outside of the boxing ring. Among other incidents Tyson has served time for rape, has been in litigation and had criminal charges brought against him for other altercations involving automobiles. Inside the boxing ring, Tyson is only a shadow of his former self. was released after being given a citation.
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Original: The Entertaiment Software Ratings Board (ESRB) changed its content rating of the contraversial Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas video game from "Mature" to "Adults Only" on Wednesday.
Revised: The Entertainment Software Ratings Board (ESRB) changed its content rating of the contraversial Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas video game from "Mature" to "Adults Only" on Wednesday.
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Original: The Entertainment Software Ratings Board (ESRB) changed its content rating of the contraversial Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas video game from "Mature" to "Adults Only" on Wednesday.
Revised: The Entertainment Software Ratings Board (ESRB) changed its content rating of the controversial Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas video game from "Mature" to "Adults Only" on Wednesday.
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Original:  Graphic sex sences in the game can be revealed if a user downloads an internet version of the "Hot Coffee modification" with a secret code that depicts characters as having sex.
Revised:  Graphic sex scenes in the game can be revealed if a user downloads an internet version of the "Hot Coffee modification" with a secret code that depicts characters as having sex.
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Original:  This contraversy has lead to major debate between execs and politicans weither the video game industry should continue to judge itself or not.
Revised:  This controversy has lead to major debate between execs and politicans weither the video game industry should continue to judge itself or not.
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Original:  This contraversy has lead to major debate between execs and politicans weither the video game industry should continue to judge itself or not.
Revised:  This contraversy has lead to major debate between execs and politicans whether the video game industry should continue to judge itself or not.
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Original:  Game maker Take-Two says the game modification is third-party software that violates the end-user license agreement of the company's intellectual property rights. 
Revised:  Game maker Take-Two says the 'game mod' is third-party software that violates the end-user license agreement of the company's intellectual property rights. 
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Original:  The ESRB change came after a investigation proved that sexual content in the game could be unlocked by anyone except for owners of the Xbox version of the game . Graphic sex scenes in the game can be revealed if a user downloads an internet version of the "Hot Coffee modification" with a secret code that depicts characters as having sex.
Revised:  The ESRB change came after a investigation proved that sexual content in the game could be unlocked by anyone except for owners of the Xbox version of the game . Graphic sex scenes in the game can be revealed if a user downloads a patch from the internet of the "Hot Coffee modification" with a secret code that depicts characters as having sex.
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Original: Oma Bakri Mohammed, the controversial Muslim cleric, has said he does not believe the London bombers were Muslims.
Revised: Oma Bakri Mohammed, a controversial Muslim cleric, has said he does not believe the London bombers were Muslims.
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Original:  "The way to earn the heart of the British youth is by the divine text, to say  God say it and ...
Revised:  "The way to earn the heart of the British youth is by the divine text, to say ' God say it and ...
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Original:  Mohammed say it, ' Do not attack the people you live among.'
Revised:  Mohammed say it, Do not attack the people you live among.'
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Original:  A National Academy of Sciences panel has recommended that the National Aeronautical and Space Administration send astronauts to repair the Hubble Space Telescope.
Revised:  A National Academy of Sciences committee has recommended that the National Aeronautical and Space Administration send astronauts to repair the Hubble Space Telescope.
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Original:  The contractors working with WFP must avoid collaborating [...] anyone working with the agency will be seen serving the interest of WFP.     
Revised:  The contractors working with WFP must avoid collaborating [...] anyone working with the agency will be seen serving the interest of WFP. " 
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Original: The World Food Programme's logoAl-Shabaab , the Somali opposition group, has said it will stop food operations by the United Nations' World Food Programme (WFP) in the country, accusing the agency of being politically motivated and disadvantaging local farmers.
Revised: Al-Shabaab , the Somali opposition group, has said it will stop food operations by the United Nations' World Food Programme (WFP) in the country, accusing the agency of being politically motivated and disadvantaging local farmers.
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Original:  The people in Afgoye last received a general food distribution from WFP in November 2009, so we fear that they are going very hungry. 
Revised:  The people in Afgoye last received a general food distribution from WFP in November 2009, so we fear that they are going very hungry. "
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Original:  many areas in southern Somalia are controlled by al-Shabaab  
Revised:  many areas in southern Somalia are controlled by al-Shabaab . 
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Original:  Image:WFPlogo130.svg|World Food Programme logo Al-Shabaab said that the agency was ruining local farming, as the quantity of the food aid didn't allow farmers to sell their goods at reasonable prices.
Revised:  Al-Shabaab said that the agency was ruining local farming, as the quantity of the food aid didn't allow farmers to sell their goods at reasonable prices.
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Original:  The WFP, meanwhile, says that armed members of al-Shabaab have blocked off food aid to refugee camps in the city of Afgoye .
Revised:  The WFP, meanwhile, says that armed members of al-Shabaab have blocked off food aid to refugee camps in the city of .
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Original: Representative Tom Tancredo (R-CO) has clarified his earlier statement that "you could take out their holy sites," in the event of a nuclear attack upon the U.S. by Islamic terrorists.
Revised: Representative Tom Tancredo (R-CO) has clarified his earlier statement that "you could take out their holy sites," in the event of a nuclear attack upon the U.S. by terrorists.
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Original:  In the interview, Tancredo discussed his request for information from the Justice Department regarding the claim of evangelical Christian journalist Joseph Farah that al-Qaida has smuggled multiple nuclear weapons into the U.S . mp3 file alt
Revised:  In the interview, Tancredo discussed his request for information from the Justice Department regarding the claim of evangelical Christian journalist that al-Qaida has smuggled multiple nuclear weapons into the U.S . mp3 file alt
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Original:  In the interview, Tancredo discussed his request for information from the Justice Department regarding the claim of evangelical Christian journalist Joseph Farah that al-Qaida has smuggled multiple nuclear weapons into the U.S . mp3 file alt
Revised:  In the interview, Tancredo discussed his request for information from the Justice Department regarding the claim of evangelical Christian journalist Joseph Farah that al-Qaida has smuggled multiple nuclear weapons into the U.S 
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Original:  In the United Kingdom, flood warnings were issued for most of Britain, and warnings for severe flooding that was possibly life-threatening were issued for parts of Cambridgeshire.
Revised:  In the United Kingdom, flood warnings have been issued for most of Britain, and warnings for severe flooding that was possibly life-threatening were issued for parts of Cambridgeshire.
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Original: In a statement, French president Nicolas Sarkozy expressed his condolences to those affected, and said France's interior minister to the areas most affected to co-ordinate a response.
Revised: In a statement, French president Nicolas Sarkozy expressed his condolences to those affected, and sent France's interior minister to the areas most affected to co-ordinate a response.
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Original:  Additionally, three are dead in Spain, and one dead in  Portugal, Belgium, and Germany.
Revised:  Additionally, three are dead in Spain, and one dead in each of Portugal, Belgium, and Germany.
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Original: In a public press conferance , Blair said that "there appear to have been no casualties", and that he wanted people to "React calmly, and continue with our lives".
Revised: In a public press conference , Blair said that "there appear to have been no casualties", and that he wanted people to "React calmly, and continue with our lives".
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Original:  Not all the bombs exploded fully , Bomb Squad officers are working on making them safe.
Revised:  Not all the bombs exploded fully ; Bomb Squad officers are working on making them safe.
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Original:   A spokesman for London Underground has stated the nature of the incidents is unknown.
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Original:  On contacting Crossrail, they have indicated approximately £50 will be offered to buy all the land  9 meters below the properties.
Revised:  On contacting Crossrail, they have indicated approximately £50 will be offered to buy all the land more than 9 meters below the properties.
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Original: It is being implemented as a hybrid bill in the Houses of Parliament.
Revised: It is being implemented as a hybrid bill in Parliament.
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Original:  It has just received it's second reading in Parliament securing the basic principal (the public element of the hybrid bill) that the line will be built.
Revised:  It has just received its second reading in Parliament securing the basic principal (the public element of the hybrid bill) that the line will be built.
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Original:  It has just received it's second reading in Parliament securing the basic principal (the public element of the hybrid bill) that the line will be built.
Revised:  It has just received it's second reading in Parliament securing the basic principle (the public element of the hybrid bill) that the line will be built.
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Original:  Crossrail does not indicate that it will attempt  assign a fair value in the original offer and instead is only going to offer around £50 in the hope that not many people take the matter to the Land Tribunal.
Revised:  Crossrail does not indicate that it will attempt to assign a fair value in the original offer and instead is only going to offer around £50 in the hope that not many people take the matter to the Land Tribunal.
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Original:  It should bring major benefits to London commuters with improved links to Heathrow airport, Central London and Stratford international (for Eurostar connections to Paris and Brussels).
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Original:  It has just received its second reading in Parliament securing the basic principle (the public element of the hybrid bill) that the line will be built.
Revised:  It has just received its second reading in Parliament securing the basic principle that the line will be built.
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Original:  The next part of the process is to ensure that the implementation of the bill is consistent with private interests (the private element of the hybrid bill) .
Revised:  The next part of the process is to ensure that the implementation of the bill is consistent with private interests .
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Original:  Residents are however not all aware of this, as it is not published on their website or openly available .
Revised:  Residents are however not all aware of this, as it is not published on their website or openly available 
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Original:  It seems that by taking this view, Crossrail is needlessly delaying the passing of this bill, as many residents are preparing petitions against the bill for this reason
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Original: Category:United Kingdom Category:England Category:London Category:Economy and business Category:Main Page Crossrail is a major new train line to be built in London  .
Revised:  Crossrail is a major new train line to be built in London .
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Original:  It has just received its second reading in Parliament securing the basic principle that the line will be built.
Revised:  After a second reading in Parliament securing the basic principle that the line will be built.
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Original:  It has just received its second reading in Parliament securing the basic principle that the line will be built.
Revised:  It has just received its second reading in Parliament , it was voted upon and decided that the government will commit to the project so that the line will be built.
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Original:  The next part of the process is to ensure that the implementation of the bill  is consistent with private interests  .
Revised:  The next issue before Parliament of to ensure that the implementation of the bill is consistent with private interests .
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Original:  The next part of the process is to ensure that the implementation of the bill  is consistent with private interests  .
Revised:  The next part of the process is to ensure that the implementation of the bill so it is consistent with private interests .
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Original:  This is the point where residents can petition parliament to amend the bill in question .
Revised:  This is when residents can petition parliament to amend the bill in question .
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Original:  This is the point where residents can petition parliament to amend the bill in question .
Revised:  This is the point where residents can petition Parliament to change the way the line is constructed .
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Original:  As part of the Crossrail Bill hundreds of homes will have new tunnels excavated under them.
Revised:  As a result of construction of the Crossrail line, hundreds of homes will have new tunnels excavated under them.
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Original:  As part of the Crossrail Bill hundreds of homes will have new tunnels excavated under them.
Revised:  As part of the Crossrail Bill hundreds of homes will have new tunnels excavated beneath them.
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Original:  On contacting Crossrail, they have indicated approximately £50 will be offered to  buy all the land  more than 9 meters below the properties .
Revised:  On contacting Crossrail, they have indicated approximately £50 will be offered to each landowner to buy all the land more than 9 meters below the properties .
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Original:  On contacting Crossrail, they have indicated approximately £50 will be offered to  buy all the land  more than 9 meters below the properties .
Revised:  On contacting Crossrail, they have indicated approximately £50 will be offered to buy all the land more than 9 meters below the residential buildings .
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Original:  The average price of property in the affected areas is £350,000.
Revised:  The average value for properties in the affected areas is £350,000.
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Original:  Under  compulsory purchase laws to be used in this bill, the residents are entitled to the difference in the value of the whole property with and without a tunnel under it.
Revised:  compulsory purchase laws to be used in this bill, the residents are entitled to the difference in the value of the whole property with and without a tunnel under it.
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