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Original:  As a young man , he was employed in the guard of Spanish king Carlos V  in which role he participated in the Sack of Rome in 1527.
Revised:  As a young man , he was employed in the guard of Spanish king Carlos V , in which role he participated in the Sack of Rome in 1527.
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Original:  Luis Lanchero - Banco de la República In 1533, searching for adventure, Lanchero left Europe for what later would become Venezuela in a conquest expedition led by Jerónimo Ortal , also spelled as Hortal.
Revised:  Luis Lanchero - Banco de la República In 1533, searching for adventure, Lanchero left Europe for what would later become Venezuela with a conquest expedition led by Jerónimo Ortal , also spelled as Hortal.
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Original:  There, Luis   Lanchero joined the expedition  by Nikolaus Federmann towards the Colombian Andes, reaching the newly founded capital of the New Kingdom of Granada in 1538.
Revised:  There, Luis Lanchero joined the expedition led by Nikolaus Federmann towards the Colombian Andes, reaching the newly founded capital of the New Kingdom of Granada in 1538.
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Original: Rodríguez Freyle, 1979 (1638), p.56 When in 1539 Hernán Pérez de Quesada took over the governance of Bogotá from his elder brother and founder Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , he organised various expeditions in search of valuables and above all the quest for El Dorado.
Revised: Rodríguez Freyle, 1979 (1638), p.56 When in 1539 Hernán Pérez de Quesada took over the governance of Bogotá from his elder brother and founder Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada he organised various expeditions in search of valuables and above all the quest for El Dorado.
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Original: Rodríguez Freyle, 1979 (1638), p.56 When in 1539 Hernán Pérez de Quesada took over the governance of Bogotá from his elder brother and founder Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , he organised various expeditions in search of valuables and above all the quest for El Dorado.
Revised: Rodríguez Freyle, 1979 (1638), p.56 When in 1539 Hernán Pérez de Quesada took over the governance of Bogotá from his elder brother and founder Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada , he organised various expeditions in search of valuables and above all for El Dorado.
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Original:  While not really satisfied with the presence of Luis Lanchero, he was sent towards the territories of the Muzo in western Boyacá in the first months of 1540.
Revised:  While de Quesada was not satisfied with Lanchero, he was sent towards the territories of the Muzo in western Boyacá in the first months of 1540.
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Original:  Description of the conquest of the Muzo The expedition into Muzo territories was difficult because of the terrain and to fight the lack of food , some horseswere slaughtered .
Revised:  Description of the conquest of the Muzo Expeditions into Muzo territories was difficult because of the terrain and to fight the lack of food , some horseswere slaughtered .
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Original:  Description of the conquest of the Muzo The expedition into Muzo territories was difficult because of the terrain and to fight the lack of food , some horseswere slaughtered .
Revised:  Description of the conquest of the Muzo The expedition into Muzo territories were difficult because of the terrain and to fight the lack of food , some horseswere slaughtered .
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Original:  Description of the conquest of the Muzo The expedition into Muzo territories was difficult because of the terrain and to fight the lack of food , some horseswere slaughtered .
Revised:  Description of the conquest of the Muzo The expedition into Muzo territories was difficult because of the terrain . Due to a lack of food , some horseswere slaughtered .
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Original:  Description of the conquest of the Muzo The expedition into Muzo territories was difficult because of the terrain and to fight the lack of food , some horseswere slaughtered .
Revised:  Description of the conquest of the Muzo The expedition into Muzo territories was difficult because of the terrain and to fight the lack of food Lanchero's party had to slaughter some horses .
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Original: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.35 After two unsuccessful attempts to submit the more than 10,000 bellicose Muzo, Lanchero marched through Panche territory in the south, the western portion of the current department of Cundinamarca back towards Bogotá.
Revised: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.35 After two unsuccessful attempts to subjugate the more than 10,000 bellicose Muzo, Lanchero marched through Panche territory in the south, the western portion of the current department of Cundinamarca back towards Bogotá.
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Original: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.35 After two unsuccessful attempts to submit the more than 10,000 bellicose Muzo, Lanchero marched through Panche territory in the south, the western portion of the current department of Cundinamarca back towards Bogotá.
Revised: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.35 After two unsuccessful attempts to submit the more than 10,000 Muzo, Lanchero marched through Panche territory in the south, the western portion of the current department of Cundinamarca back towards Bogotá.
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Original: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.35 After two unsuccessful attempts to submit the more than 10,000 bellicose Muzo, Lanchero marched through Panche territory in the south, the western portion of the current department of Cundinamarca back towards Bogotá.
Revised: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.35 After two unsuccessful attempts to submit the more than 10,000 bellicose Muzo, Lanchero marched through Panche territory to the south, the western portion of the current department of Cundinamarca back towards Bogotá.
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Original:   In early 1559, fifteen years after the discovery of the rich emerald deposits by Diego Martínez, Lanchero returned to Muzo terrain and passed through Maripí to found Villa de la Santísima Trinidad de los Muzos, today known as Muzo, on February 20 , 1559.
Revised:  Founding of Muzo In early 1559, fifteen years after the discovery of the rich emerald deposits by Diego Martínez, Lanchero returned to Muzo terrain and passed through Maripí to found Villa de la Santísima Trinidad de los Muzos, today known as Muzo, on February 20 , 1559.
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Original:   In early 1559, fifteen years after the discovery of the rich emerald deposits by Diego Martínez, Lanchero returned to Muzo terrain and passed through Maripí to found Villa de la Santísima Trinidad de los Muzos, today known as Muzo, on February 20 , 1559.
Revised:  In early 1559, fifteen years after the discovery of the rich emerald deposits by Diego Martínez, Lanchero returned to Muzo terrain and passed through Maripí . He founded Villa de la Santísima Trinidad de los Muzos, today known as Muzo, on February 20 , 1559.
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Original:   In early 1559, fifteen years after the discovery of the rich emerald deposits by Diego Martínez, Lanchero returned to Muzo terrain and passed through Maripí to found Villa de la Santísima Trinidad de los Muzos, today known as Muzo, on February 20 , 1559.
Revised:  In early 1559, fifteen years after the discovery of the rich emerald deposits by Diego Martínez, Lanchero returned to Muzo terrain and passed through Maripí to found Villa de la Santísima Trinidad de los Muzos, today known as Muzo, on February20 , 1559.
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Original: Puche Riart, 1996, p.100 During the battles against the Muzo, Lanchero was hurt by an arrow in his chest.
Revised: Puche Riart, 1996, p.100 During the battles against the Muzo, Lanchero was wounded by an arrow in his chest.
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1688, Chapter VI In 1560 , Lanchero handed the reign of Muzo over to the encomenderos, leading to successive battles over the rich emerald grounds.
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1688, Chapter VI In 1560 Lanchero handed the reign of Muzo over to the encomenderos, leading to successive battles over the rich emerald grounds.
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1688, Chapter VI In 1560 , Lanchero handed the reign of Muzo over to the encomenderos, leading to successive battles over the rich emerald grounds.
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1688, Chapter VI In 1560 , Lanchero handed the governance of Muzo over to the encomenderos, leading to successive battles over the rich emerald grounds.
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Original: De Piedrahita, 1688, Chapter VI In 1560 , Lanchero handed the reign of Muzo over to the encomenderos, leading to successive battles over the rich emerald grounds.
Revised: De Piedrahita, 1688, Chapter VI In 1560 , Lanchero handed the reign of Muzo over to the encomenderos, leading to successive struggles over the rich emerald grounds.
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Original: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.52  After Miguel Diez de Armendariz took control of the area, Lanchero lost all his possessions. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Luis Lanchero died  in Tunja in 1562, leaving a wife and one daughter.
Revised: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.52 After Miguel Diez de Armendariz took control of the area, Lanchero lost all his possessions. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Luis Lanchero died in poverty in Tunja in 1562, leaving a wife and one daughter.
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Original: Luis Lanchero, also known as Luis Lancheros (?, Castile - 1562, Tunja, New Kingdom of Granada) was a Spanish conquistador and the founder of the town of Muzo, Boyacá, the most important emerald settlement of Colombia.
Revised: Luis Lanchero, also known as Luis Lancheros (?, Castile - 1562, Tunja, New Kingdom of Granada) was a Spanish conquistador and the founder of the town of Muzo, Boyacá, the most important emerald settlement in Colombia.
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Original:  Muzo was founded after twenty years of unsuccessful attempts to subjugate the Muzo to the Spanish rule.
Revised:  Muzo was founded after twenty years of unsuccessful attempts to subjugate the Muzo to Spanish rule.
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Original: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.35 After two unsuccessful attempts to subjugate the more than 10,000 Muzo, Lanchero marched through Panche territory to the south, the western portion of the current department of Cundinamarca  back towards Bogotá.
Revised: Tequia Porras, 2008, p.35 After two unsuccessful attempts to subjugate the more than 10,000 Muzo, Lanchero marched through Panche territory to the south, the western portion of the current department of Cundinamarca , back towards Bogotá.
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Original: He is also the author of the two-volume Arab Spring Manifesto, in which he outlined a vision of an “Islamic libertarianism” that he hoped could become the guiding philosophy of his region in the wake of the Arab Spring On April 30, 2014, he tweeted about his close friend, the Egyptian activist Bassem Sabry, who had just died.
Revised: He is also the author of the two-volume Arab Spring Manifesto, in which he outlined a vision of an "Islamic libertarianism" that he hoped could become the guiding philosophy of his region in the wake of the Arab Spring On April 30, 2014, he tweeted about his close friend, the Egyptian activist Bassem Sabry, who had just died.
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Original:  One official said, “ You should try and remember if you said anything that might cause something like this.
Revised:  One official said, " You should try and remember if you said anything that might cause something like this.
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Original:  ” Baghdadi, who was 36 at the time, chose deportation.
Revised:  " Baghdadi, who was 36 at the time, chose deportation.
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Original:  He then spent 13 days in al-Sadr prison in Abu Dhabi, where the conditions were “ terrible beyond belief.
Revised:  He then spent 13 days in al-Sadr prison in Abu Dhabi, where the conditions were " terrible beyond belief.
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Original:  ” He was then sent out of the country.
Revised:  " He was then sent out of the country.
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Original:  On June 8, thanks to efforts by friends and activists, as well as by the Palestinian embassy in Malaysia, the Malaysian government permitted him to enter the country as an “ exceptional case.
Revised:  On June 8, thanks to efforts by friends and activists, as well as by the Palestinian embassy in Malaysia, the Malaysian government permitted him to enter the country as an " exceptional case.
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Original:  ” Baghdadi did not criticize the UAE publicly for any of this, for fear of what might happen to his family in the UAE if he did.
Revised:  " Baghdadi did not criticize the UAE publicly for any of this, for fear of what might happen to his family in the UAE if he did.
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Original:  In a January 2016 essay for Foreign Policy, Baghdadi argued that “ Riyadh's next move won't be in Syria or Yemen – it'll aim to hit Tehran where it really hurts.
Revised:  In a January 2016 essay for Foreign Policy, Baghdadi argued that " Riyadh's next move won't be in Syria or Yemen – it'll aim to hit Tehran where it really hurts.
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Original:  ” Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as “ symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. ” H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's “ consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. ”
Revised:  " Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as “ symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. ” H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's “ consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. ”
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Original:  ” Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as “ symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. ” H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's “ consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. ”
Revised:  ” Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as " symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. ” H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's “ consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. ”
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Original:  ” Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as “ symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. ” H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's “ consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. ”
Revised:  ” Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as “ symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. " H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's “ consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. ”
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Original:  ” Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as “ symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. ” H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's “ consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. ”
Revised:  ” Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as “ symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. ” H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's " consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. ”
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Original:  ” Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as “ symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. ” H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's “ consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. ”
Revised:  ” Nicholas McGeehan of Human Rights Watch has described Baghdadi's case as “ symptomatic of the UAE’s paranoia and its fear of critical thought and free speech. ” H. A. Hellyer, an associate fellow at the Royal United Services Institute, has praised Baghdadi's “ consistency in criticizing various political forces, dependent on principle, rather than partisanship. "
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Original: A February 2011 You Tube video of Egyptian activist Asmaa Mahfouz ’ s call for Egyptians to protest in Tahrir square in Cairo, featuring translation by Baghdadi, was viewed over a million times.
Revised: A February 2011 You Tube video of Egyptian activist Asmaa Mahfouz ' s call for Egyptians to protest in Tahrir square in Cairo, featuring translation by Baghdadi, was viewed over a million times.
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Original:  In March 2011, he posted an online collection of his satirical tweets entitled The Arab Tyrant ’ s Manual.
Revised:  In March 2011, he posted an online collection of his satirical tweets entitled The Arab Tyrant ' s Manual.
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Original:  He is also the author of the two-volume Arab Spring Manifesto, in which he outlined a vision of an "Islamic libertarianism" that he hoped could become the guiding philosophy of his region in the wake of the Arab Spring 
Revised:  He is also the author of the two-volume Arab Spring Manifesto, in which he outlined a vision of an "Islamic libertarianism" that he hoped could become the guiding philosophy of his region in the wake of the Arab Spring .
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Original: As of 2018, he is a fellow of Civita,Iyad el-Baghdadi, Fellow, Civita and has cofounded the Kawaakibi-foundation , named after Abd al-Rahman al-Kawakibi.
Revised: As of 2018, he is a fellow of Civita,Iyad el-Baghdadi, Fellow, Civita and has cofounded the Kawaakibi Foundation , named after Abd al-Rahman al-Kawakibi.
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Original:  He created the widely spread hashtag #ArabTyrantManual , and was widely cited in such mainstream .
Revised:  He is the creator of the widely spread hashtag #ArabTyrantManual , and was widely cited in such mainstream .
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Original:  He created the widely spread hashtag #ArabTyrantManual , and was widely cited in such mainstream .
Revised:  He created the widely spread hashtag #ArabTyrantManual and was cited as such by mainstream news reporting .
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Original:  Artists such as Robert J. Lang, Erik and Martin Demaine, Sipho Mabona, Giang Dinh and others, are frequently cited to exemplify the way in which origami continues to challenge the limits of an art increasingly committed to its time.
Revised:  Artists such as Robert J. Lang, Erik and Martin Demaine, Sipho Mabona, Giang Dinh and others, are frequently cited to exemplify the way in which origami continues to push the limits of an art increasingly committed to its time.
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Original: Origami as Fine Art : For centuries, the art of paper folding remained within the scope of craft practices.
Revised: Origami as Fine Arts : For centuries, the art of paper folding remained within the scope of craft practices.
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Original:  Artists such as Robert J. Lang, Erik Demaine, Sipho Mabona, Giang Dinh, Paul Jackson and others, are frequently cited to exemplify the way in which origami continues to push the limits of an art increasingly committed to its time.
Revised:  Artists like Robert J. Lang, Erik Demaine, Sipho Mabona, Giang Dinh, Paul Jackson and others, are frequently cited to exemplify the way in which origami continues to push the limits of an art increasingly committed to its time.
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Original:  The computational facet and the interchanges through social networks, where new techniques and designs flow and are nurtured, have made origami a paradigmatic art of the 21st century.
Revised:  The computational facet and the interchanges through social networks, where new techniques and designs are introduced, have raised the profile of origami in the 21st century.
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Original:  They had three children: Allison, Melanie, and Daniel.
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Original: Sacramento City College alumni Category:George Washington University alumni Category:Punahou School alumni Category:Kamehameha Schools alumni Category:President Theodore Roosevelt High School alumni Category:Poets from Hawaii Category:American people of French Polynesian descent Category:American people of English descent Category:American people of French descent Category: American people of Spanish descent Category: Burials at Oahu Cemetery Category:Writers from Hawa
Revised: Sacramento City College alumni Category:George Washington University alumni Category:Punahou School alumni Category:Kamehameha Schools alumni Category:President Theodore Roosevelt High School alumni Category:Poets from Hawaii Category:American people of French Polynesian descent Category:American people of English descent Category:American people of French descent Category: Burials at Oahu Cemetery Category:Writers from Hawa
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Original: Native Hawaiian people Category:Columbia University alumni Category:Sacramento City College alumni Category:George Washington University alumni Category:Punahou School alumni Category:Kamehameha Schools alumni Category:President Theodore Roosevelt High School alumni Category:Poets from Hawaii Category:American people of French Polynesian descent Category:American people of English descent Category: American people of French descent Category: Burials at Oahu Cemetery Category:Writers from Hawa
Revised: Native Hawaiian people Category:Columbia University alumni Category:Sacramento City College alumni Category:George Washington University alumni Category:Punahou School alumni Category:Kamehameha Schools alumni Category:President Theodore Roosevelt High School alumni Category:Poets from Hawaii Category:American people of French Polynesian descent Category:American people of English descent Category: Burials at Oahu Cemetery Category:Writers from Hawa
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Original:  His first marriage was to Fredda M. deVere Burwell, an artist  New York.
Revised:  His first marriage was to Fredda M. deVere Burwell, an artist from New York.
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Original:  He lived in New York for  time before returning to Hawaii with his wife.
Revised:  He lived in New York for some time before returning to Hawaii with his wife.
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Original:  Holt is known mainly for his literary contribution .
Revised:  Holt is known mainly for his literary work .
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Original:  Through his contribution , Hawaii saw a revival in traditional Hawaiian culture, art and language.;
Revised:  Through his writings , Hawaii saw a revival in traditional Hawaiian culture, art and language.;
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Original:  In 1985, Holt was awarded the Hawai ' i Award for Literature by Governor John David Waiheʻe III.
Revised:  In 1985, Holt was awarded the Hawai ‘ i Award for Literature by Governor John David Waiheʻe III.
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Original: , thus and: . or : for given dimensions and loading case.
Revised: , thus and: . or for given dimensions and loading case.
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Original:  Then, as W and Δ depend only on : and: Which for a given loading case, is the specific weight of a macrostructure per unit of force and length, depending only from the geometry through L/H, and the materials though σ/ρ.
Revised:  Then, as W and Δ depend only on : and: which for a given loading case, is the specific weight of a macrostructure per unit of force and length, depending only from the geometry through L/H, and the materials though σ/ρ.
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