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Original:  The coach was carrying 34 people on a skiing trip, the circumstances of the accident are not yet known.
Revised:  The coach was carrying 34 people on a ski trip, the circumstances of the accident are not yet known.
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Original:  Since military operations began in November 2001, twenty-one British soldiers have died  
Revised:  Since military operations began in November 2001, twenty-one British soldiers have died . 
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Original: The  Ministry of Defence has named the British soldier who was killed in Afghanistan yesterday.
Revised: The British Ministry of Defence has named the British soldier who was killed in Afghanistan yesterday.
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Original: The  Ministry of Defence has named the British soldier who was killed in Afghanistan yesterday.
Revised: The Ministry of Defence named soldier who was killed in Afghanistan yesterday.
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Original:  Lance Corporal Jonathan Hetherington was shot dead by insurgents during an attack on his platoon residence in Musa Qaleh, northern Helmand.
Revised:  He was Lance Cpl. Jonathan Hetherington and was shot dead by insurgents during an attack on his platoon residence in Musa Qaleh, northern Helmand.
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Original:  The twenty-two year-old joined the army in September 2000.
Revised:  The 22-year-old joined the army in September 2000.
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Original:  His commanding officer, Lieutenant Colonel Steve Vickery, said: “Lance Corporal Jon Hetherington had only been in Afghanistan for a short time.
Revised:  His commanding officer, Lt. Col, Steve Vickery, said: “Lance Corporal Jon Hetherington had only been in Afghanistan for a short time.
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Original:  In this period his commitment to his profession was first class and he stood out as a young man of stature and great enthusiasm.
Revised:  In this period his commitment to his profession was first-class and he stood out as a young man of stature and great enthusiasm.
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Original:  He also said that L/Cpl Hetherington was “an outstanding soldier, trusted comrade and valued friend ”.
Revised:  He also said that Lance Cpl. Hetherington was “an outstanding soldier, trusted comrade and valued friend ”.
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Original:  He also said that L/Cpl Hetherington was “an outstanding soldier, trusted comrade and valued friend ”.
Revised:  He also said that L/Cpl Hetherington was “an outstanding soldier, trusted comrade and valued friend .”
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Original:  Since military operations began in November 2001, twenty-one British soldiers have died.
Revised:  Since military operations began in November 2001, 21 British soldiers have died.
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Original: The British Ministry of Defence named  soldier who was killed in Afghanistan yesterday.
Revised: The British Ministry of Defence named the soldier who was killed in Afghanistan yesterday.
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Original: His commanding officer, Lt. Col, Steve Vickery, said: “ Lance Corporal Jon Hetherington had only been in Afghanistan for a short time.
Revised: His commanding officer, Lt. Col, Steve Vickery, said: " Lance Corporal Jon Hetherington had only been in Afghanistan for a short time.
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Original:  ” He also said that Lance Cpl.
Revised:  " He also said that Lance Cpl.
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Original:  Hetherington was “ an outstanding soldier, trusted comrade and valued friend.
Revised:  Hetherington was " an outstanding soldier, trusted comrade and valued friend.
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Original:  ” Defence Secretary Des Browne said yesterday: “ The sad news…
Revised:  " Defence Secretary Des Browne said yesterday: “ The sad news…
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Original:  ” Defence Secretary Des Browne said yesterday: “ The sad news…
Revised:  ” Defence Secretary Des Browne said yesterday: " The sad news…
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Original:  We are there as part of the Nato mission to help rid Afghanistan of these terrorists and provide security to help rebuild. ”
Revised:  We are there as part of the Nato mission to help rid Afghanistan of these terrorists and provide security to help rebuild. "
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Original:  Two Chinese players, Peng Fengling and Fu Yongqing, were sent off after earning five personal fouls a piece in a quarter that featured continued ramming of both teams into their opposition.
Revised:  Two Chinese players, Peng Fengling and Fu Yongqing, were sent off after earning five personal fouls apiece in a quarter that featured continued ramming of both teams into their opposition.
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Original:  Japan's second quarterplay was better than China: they hurried down the floor to set up their offense before the Chinese had a chance to set up their defense.
Revised:  In the second quarter, Japan hurried down the floor to set up their offense before the Chinese had a chance to set up their defense.
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Original:  The bomber detonated  explosives, apparently strapped to his body, outside the busy market which is close to a police station.
Revised:  The bomber detonated the explosives, apparently strapped to his body, outside the busy market which is close to a police station.
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Original: AIMING TO PUBLISH @ 20:15 UTC*** 17 people were killed today, and another 47 injured when a suicide bomber detonated a hidden explosive in a market.
Revised:  17 people were killed today, and another 47 injured when a suicide bomber detonated a hidden explosive in a market.
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Original: There are conflicting reports that the bombing may have been the work of al-Qaeda related groups, or it may have been done by a group of men meeting to settle a dispute.
Revised: There are conflicting reports that the bombing may have been the work of related groups, or it may have been done by a group of men meeting to settle a dispute.
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Original:  Germany had a fast break in the second minute with Gesche Schunemann capitalizing on it to score and bring the game to 42–40.
Revised:  Germany had a fast break in the second minute with capitalizing on it to score and bring the game to 42–40.
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Original:  German frustration set in at the 1:18 mark when Marina Mohnen got a technical foul for unsportsman like conduct, and then topped that off with a second technical foul.
Revised:  German frustration set in at the 1:18 mark when Marina Mohnen got a technical foul for unsportsman-like conduct, and then topped that off with a second technical foul.
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Original:  Australia's Cobi Crispin fouled a German player which resulted in Crispin being sent off for having five personals.
Revised:  Australia's fouled a German player which resulted in Crispin being sent off for having five personals.
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Original:  The Rollers and Great Britain will meet again in their first match of London Paralympics when they play eachother on August 30.
Revised:  The Rollers and Great Britain will meet again in their first match of London Paralympics when they play each other on August 30.
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Original: Like the preceeding game featuring Australia's women that was only won in the fourth quarter, this match was close until the very end.
Revised: Like the preceding game featuring Australia's women that was only won in the fourth quarter, this match was close until the very end.
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Original: AIMING TO PUBLISH FOR 22:00 UTC In the southern city of Diwania, Iraqi troops battled members of the Shia minority's Mehdi Army, killing 40 gunmen and wounding another 40 civilians.
Revised:  In the southern city of Diwania, Iraqi troops battled members of the Shia minority's Mehdi Army, killing 40 gunmen and wounding another 40 civilians.
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Original:  Factions still loyal to the Hussein Regieme remain under cover, undermining the reported progress of western forces . Related New
Revised:  Factions still loyal to the Hussein Regieme remain under cover, undermining the reported progress of western forces Related New
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Original:  Factions still loyal to the Hussein Regieme remain under cover, undermining the reported progress of western forces . Related New
Revised:  Factions still loyal to the Hussein Regieme remain under cover, undermining the reported progress of western forces . 
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Original: Casualties are mounting in a Sri Lankan army offensive launched in the northeast of Sri Lanka .
Revised: Casualties are mounting in a Sri Lankan army offensive launched in the northeast of the island nation .
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Original:  "There was heavy shelling and aerial bombardment, 20 civilians were killed and 26 injured," rebel spokesman Rasiah Ilanthiraiyan told The Associated Press.
Revised:  "There was heavy shelling and aerial bombardment, 20 civilians were killed and 26 injured," rebel spokesman Rasiah Ilanthiraiyan told the Associated Press.
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Original:  I don't think any civilian lives there." Related Storie
Revised:  I don't think any civilian lives there." Related new
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Original: 200px|right The software watchdog group StopBadware.org, ran by the Berkman Center for Internet & Society of Harvard Law School and the Oxford Internet Institute, has opened a dialogue with AOL with concerns over the presence of badware, also known as malware, in the now-free AOL 9.0 software.
Revised: 200px|right The software watchdog group StopBadware.org, run by the Berkman Center for Internet & Society of Harvard Law School and the Oxford Internet Institute, has opened a dialogue with AOL with concerns over the presence of badware, also known as malware, in the now-free AOL 9.0 software.
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Original: 200px|right The software watchdog group StopBadware.org, ran by the Berkman Center for Internet & Society of Harvard Law School and the Oxford Internet Institute, has opened a dialogue with AOL with concerns over the presence of badware, also known as malware, in the now-free AOL 9.0 software.
Revised: 200px|right The software watchdog group StopBadware.org, ran by the Berkman Center for Internet & Society of Harvard Law School and the Oxford Internet Institute, has opened a dialogue with AOL about concerns over the presence of badware, also known as malware, in the now-free AOL 9.0 software.
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Original:  The Plattsburgh hospital had interpreters on hand for some French-speaking Canadian patients, Hildebran said".
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Original:  According to Greyhound there were  52 passengers on the bus , No. 4014 , which had been due to arrive in Montreal at 9:10 pm  .
Revised:  According to Greyhound there were 52 passengers on the bus , No. 4014 had been due to arrive in Montreal at 9:10 pm .
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Original: "We anticipate that as many as half will be admitted," said Mike Hildebran, a spokesman for Champlain Valley Physicians Hospital Medical Center in Plattsburgh, New York.
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Original:  Thirty-seven passengers were taken to Champlain Valley Hospital in Plattsburgh, N.Y., after the crash.
Revised:  Thirty-seven passengers were taken to Champlain Valley Hospital in Plattsburgh, New York, following the crash.
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Original:  The rear and top of the bus was crushed and one of its back wheels was turned inward.
Revised:  The rear and top of the bus were crushed and one of its back wheels was turned inward.
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Original:   Ruefly (who leaves home at 5:00 a.m. every day to beat the traffic) had crashed into a stationary tractor-trailer on the bridge, leaving him with severely crushed hips.
Revised:  Mr Ruefly (who leaves home at 5:00 a.m. every day to beat the traffic) had crashed into a stationary tractor-trailer on the bridge, leaving him with severely crushed hips.
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Original: The demolition is part of a complete replacement of the former six-lane bridge with a twelve lane version comprising of two side-by-side drawbridges.
Revised: The demolition is part of a complete replacement of the former six-lane bridge with a twelve lane version comprised of two side-by-side drawbridges.
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Original:  There was a 20 second delay between the time of intiation and the actual detonation.
Revised:  There was a 20 second delay between the time of initiation and the actual detonation.
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Original:  This demolition is the first step in the nest stage of the project;
Revised:  This demolition is the first step in the next stage of the project;
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Original: Christchurch, New Zealand Redbus bus driver Micheal Sean Ohiomhair, 57-year-old, is being saught for $9000 by the New Zealand Police for wasting time and resources after he filed a false statement that a woman had attacked him.
Revised: Christchurch, New Zealand Redbus bus driver Micheal Sean Ohiomhair, 57-year-old, is being sought for $9000 by the New Zealand Police for wasting time and resources after he filed a false statement that a woman had attacked him.
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Original: Police and ambulance personell were called to the scene on May 10 at 2045 (NZST), when Ohiomhair told the police that a woman had attacked him while he was at a bus stop in Hornby, Christchurch.
Revised: Police and ambulance personnel were called to the scene on May 10 at 2045 (NZST), when Ohiomhair told the police that a woman had attacked him while he was at a bus stop in Hornby, Christchurch.
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Original:  My client had now consulted mental health services for on-going psychological matters. "
Revised:  My client had now consulted mental health services for on-going psychological matters. 
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Original: Turkish government spokesman and Justice Minister Cemil Cicek has confirmed the Turkish governments intentions to send troops to Lebanon under the UN Resolution 1701.
Revised: Turkish government spokesman and Justice Minister Cemil Cicek has confirmed the Turkish government's intentions to send troops to Lebanon under the UN Resolution 1701.
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Original:  But  UN resolution does not focus on humanitarian aid", said Sezer on Thursday.
Revised:  But the UN resolution does not focus on humanitarian aid", said Sezer on Thursday.
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Original:  On Saturday, Head of Parliament Bulent Arinc,MP has made a counter declaration that , it is not Presidents but government and parliament's job to decide sending troops.
Revised:  On Saturday, Head of Parliament MP Bulent Arinc has made a counter declaration that , it is not Presidents but government and parliament's job to decide sending troops.
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Original:  On Saturday, Head of Parliament Bulent Arinc,MP has made a counter declaration that , it is not Presidents but government and parliament's job to decide sending troops.
Revised:  On Saturday, Head of Parliament Bulent Arinc,MP has made a counter declaration that it is not Presidents but government and parliament's job to decide sending troops.
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Original:  On Saturday, Head of Parliament Bulent Arinc,MP has made a counter declaration that , it is not Presidents but government and parliament's job to decide sending troops.
Revised:  On Saturday, Head of Parliament Bulent Arinc,MP has made a counter declaration that , it is not Presidents but government and parliament's decision on whether or not to send troops.
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Original:  The new Millitay Chief of Staff General Yasar Buyukanit said "It is government's duty to decide joining the operation", but he also underlined that Turkish army has started the preparations.
Revised:  The new Militay Chief of Staff General Yasar Buyukanit said "It is government's duty to decide joining the operation", but he also underlined that Turkish army has started the preparations.
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Original:  The final decision has to be given by Turkish Parliament probably this week or early next week according to government spokesperson Cemil Cicek
Revised:  The final decision has to be given by Turkish Parliament , expected this week or early next week according to government spokesperson Cemil Cicek
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Original: Turkish government spokesman and Justice Minister Cemil Cicek has confirmed the Turkish government's intentions to send troops to Lebanon under the UN Resolution 1701.
Revised: Turkish government spokesman and Justice Minister Cemil Cicek has confirmed their government's intentions to send troops to Lebanon under the UN Resolution 1701.
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Original:  The statement was made after the Council of Ministers meeting yesterday.
Revised:  The statement was made after the Council of Ministers met yesterday.
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Original:  Sezer's statements on Friday was regarded as a clear indication of  President's reluctancy to send Turkish troops to Lebanon.
Revised:  Sezer's statements on Friday was regarded as a clear indication of the President's reluctancy to send Turkish troops to Lebanon.
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Original:  Despite differences between state organs opinions, Turkish people are not very enthutiastic to send their army to Lebanon as one online survey on the highest selling daily newspaper Hurriyet web page indicates.
Revised:  Despite differences between state organs opinions, Turkish people are not very enthusiastic to send their army to Lebanon as one online survey on the highest selling daily newspaper Hurriyet web page indicates.
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Original:  The  trafficker, identified as Vonod Sharma, claimed that the contraband was not his and that he had nothing to do with the matter.
Revised:  The alleged trafficker, identified as Vonod Sharma, claimed that the contraband was not his and that he had nothing to do with the matter.
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Original:  His luck, however, ran out on Sunday when the Delhi Police arrested him at his Kalkaji residence.
Revised:  On Sunday the Delhi Police arrested him at his Kalkaji residence.
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Original:  The alleged trafficker, identified as Vonod Sharma, claimed that the contraband was not his and that he had nothing to do with the matter.
Revised:  The alleged trafficker, identified as Vinod Sharma, claimed that the contraband was not his and that he had nothing to do with the matter.
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Original:  Thatcher, the only woman to have become British Prime Minister, is recognised as one of the most significant British politicians in recent political history, as such she has tended to attract both strong support and strong opposition.
Revised:  Thatcher, the only woman to have become British Prime Minister, is recognised as one of the most significant British politicians in recent history, and her policies have been met with both strong support and strong opposition.
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Original:  In 2004 a poll of political academics (organised by MORI) Atlee was voted the most effective ( Non-Wartime ) British Prime Minister of the 20th century.
Revised:  In 2004 a poll of political academics (organised by MORI) Atlee was voted the most effective ( non-wartime ) British Prime Minister of the 20th century.
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Original: Margaret Thatcher and Clement Atlee topped a list of the greatest British Prime Ministers . Hstorian Francis Beckett(of BBC History magazine) gave 20 Prime Ministers a rank from 0 to 5, basing his view on the leader's implementation of their policy rather than the content of their policies.
Revised: Margaret Thatcher and Clement Atlee topped a list of the greatest British Prime Ministers , evaluated by Historian Francis Beckett. Writing in the BBC History Magazine, Beckett gave 20 Prime Ministers a rank from 0 to 5, basing his view on the leader's implementation of their policy rather than the content of their policies.
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Original: Margaret Thatcher and Clement Atlee topped a list of the greatest British Prime Ministers . Hstorian Francis Beckett(of BBC History magazine) gave 20 Prime Ministers a rank from 0 to 5, basing his view on the leader's implementation of their policy rather than the content of their policies.
Revised: Margaret Thatcher and Clement Atlee topped a list of the greatest British Prime Ministers . Hstorian Francis Beckett(of BBC History magazine) gave 20 Prime Ministers a score from 0 to 5, basing his view on the leader's implementation of their policy rather than the content of their policies.
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Original:  The current Prime Minister, Tony Blair , ranked mid table;
Revised:  The current Prime Minister, Tony Blair ranked mid table;
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Original:  Of the 20 only Neville Chamberlain and Sir Anthony Eden scored 0. Beckett cited Chamberlain's failure to prevent war as his reason for the low marking
Revised:  Of the twenty, only Neville Chamberlain and Sir Anthony Eden scored 0. Beckett cited Chamberlain's failure to prevent war as his reason for the low marking
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Original: Margaret Thatcher and Clement Atlee topped a list of the greatest British Prime Ministers, evaluated by Historian Francis Beckett.
Revised: Margaret Thatcher and Clement Attlee topped a list of the greatest British Prime Ministers, evaluated by Historian Francis Beckett.
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Original:  120px|Margaret Thatcher120px|Clement Attlee Thatcher and Atlee topped the list (both scoring 5).
Revised:  120px|Margaret Thatcher120px|Clement Attlee Thatcher and Attlee topped the list (both scoring 5).
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Original:  "Today few people under 40 remember a time when trade unions were a real force in the land, when the public sector controlled large swathes of the economy, when local councils controlled education and other local services, when benefits were considered rights of citizenship," Atlee , the longest serving Labour party leader (at 20 years) and Prime Minister from 1945 to 1951, ranked highly due to his key role in major reforms in British politics and economy.
Revised:  "Today few people under 40 remember a time when trade unions were a real force in the land, when the public sector controlled large swathes of the economy, when local councils controlled education and other local services, when benefits were considered rights of citizenship," Attlee , the longest serving Labour party leader (at 20 years) and Prime Minister from 1945 to 1951, ranked highly due to his key role in major reforms in British politics and economy.
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Original:  Interestingly, in the same poll Thatcher came 16th whilst Atlee did not feature.
Revised:  Interestingly, in the same poll Thatcher came 16th whilst Attlee did not feature.
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Original:  District officials rushed to the spot and initiated efforts  rescue survivors and extricate the bodies of the deceased.
Revised:  District officials rushed to the spot and initiated efforts to rescue survivors and extricate the bodies of the deceased.
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Original: A van carrying around thirty-three people crashed into the Alamatti reservoir on the Krishna river in north Karnataka , killing 25 people while the rest managed to swim to safety.
Revised: A van carrying around thirty-three people crashed into the Alamatti reservoir on the in north , killing 25 people while the rest managed to swim to safety.
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Original: A van carrying around thirty-three people crashed into the Alamatti reservoir on the in north , killing 25 people while the rest managed to swim to safety.
Revised: A carrying around thirty-three people crashed into the Alamatti reservoir on the in north , killing 25 people while the rest managed to swim to safety.
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Original: A van carrying around thirty-three people crashed into the Alamatti reservoir on the in north , killing 25 people while the rest managed to swim to safety.
Revised: A van carrying around thirty-three people crashed into the Alamatti on the in north , killing 25 people while the rest managed to swim to safety.
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