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Original:  The earlier Pacific quakes were at 1340 UTC ( in Papua New Guinea, close to the populous island of New Britain, magnitude 6.0 ) and 1708 UTC ( 110 km  from the remote Loyalty Islands, New Caledonia,  magnitude 6.3. )
Revised:  The earlier Pacific quakes were at 1340 UTC ( in Papua New Guinea, close to the populous island of New Britain, magnitude 6.0 ) and 1708 UTC , 110 km from the remote Loyalty Islands, New Caledonia, magnitude 6.3. )
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Original:  The earlier Pacific quakes were at 1340 UTC ( in Papua New Guinea, close to the populous island of New Britain, magnitude 6.0 ) and 1708 UTC ( 110 km  from the remote Loyalty Islands, New Caledonia,  magnitude 6.3. )
Revised:  The earlier Pacific quakes were at 1340 UTC ( in Papua New Guinea, close to the populous island of New Britain, magnitude 6.0 ) and 1708 UTC ( 110 km from the remote Loyalty Islands, New Caledonia, magnitude 6.3. 
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Original: Dr Manmohan Singh, age 76, is the 17th and current Prime Minister of the Republic of India.
Revised: Dr Manmohan Singh, is the 17th and current Prime Minister of the Republic of India.
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Original: Dr  Manmohan Singh is the 17th and current Prime Minister of the Republic of India.
Revised: Dr . Manmohan Singh is the 17th and current Prime Minister of the Republic of India.
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Original:  This is an important step," said Dr Rama Kant Panda, one of the surgeons, after the 11-hour procedure on Saturday.
Revised:  This is an important step," said Dr . Ramakant Panda, one of the surgeons, after the 11-hour procedure on Saturday.
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Original:  According to Dr Vijay D'Silva,  Singh has been given a liquid diet since morning , including a cup of tea, and was speaking to doctors after the procedure.
Revised:  According to Dr Vijay D'Silva, Singh has been given a liquid diet since morning including a cup of tea, and was speaking to doctors after the procedure.
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Original:  "The way you [doctors] are taking care of me, you should  take care of other people also, "  D'Silva  quoted Singh as saying.
Revised:  "The way you [doctors] are taking care of me, you should also take care of other people also, " D'Silva quoted Singh as saying.
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Original:  "The way you [doctors] are taking care of me, you should  take care of other people also, "  D'Silva  quoted Singh as saying.
Revised:  "The way you [doctors] are taking care of me, you should take care of other people " D'Silva quoted Singh as saying.
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Original:  "The way you [doctors] are taking care of me, you should  take care of other people also, "  D'Silva  quoted Singh as saying.
Revised:  "The way you [doctors] are taking care of me, you should take care of other people also, " , Dr. D'Silva quoted Singh as saying.
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Original:  Singh's personal physician and AIIMS cardiac surgeon, Dr K S Reddy, has predicted the PM will be allowed to attend to some official work in two weeks, to most of the duties in four weeks and will be able to to resume office in six weeks.
Revised:  Singh's personal physician and AIIMS cardiac surgeon, Dr . K. S. Reddy, has predicted the PM will be allowed to attend to some official work in two weeks, to most of the duties in four weeks and will be able to to resume office in six weeks.
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Original:  Earlier, Dr K S Reddy had discussions with Dr Panda in connection with the line of treatment to be followed," the team of 11 doctors said.
Revised:  Earlier, Dr . K. S. Reddy had discussions with Dr Panda in connection with the line of treatment to be followed," the team of 11 doctors said.
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Original:  "The new grafts, all 3 mm long, will last the PM the rest of his life," said Dr  Pradyot Kumar Rath from the Asian Heart Institute.
Revised:  "The new grafts, all 3 mm long, will last the PM the rest of his life," said Dr . Pradyot Kumar Rath from the Asian Heart Institute.
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Original:  PM was sent back to the ICU at 8:55 pm," said Dr  Reddy.
Revised:  PM was sent back to the ICU at 8:55 pm," said Dr . Reddy.
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Original:  Earlier, Dr. K. S. Reddy had discussions with Dr  Panda in connection with the line of treatment to be followed," the team of 11 doctors said.
Revised:  Earlier, Dr. K. S. Reddy had discussions with Dr . Panda in connection with the line of treatment to be followed," the team of 11 doctors said.
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Original: Dendermonde town centre Two children and an woman have been stabbed to death at a creche in Dendermondein Belgiumby a knife wielding man . Officials say that two children and a female adult were confirmed to have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the creche in East Flanders.
Revised: Dendermonde town centre Two children and a woman have been stabbed to death at a creche in Dendermondein Belgiumby a knife wielding man . Officials say that two children and a female adult were confirmed to have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the creche in East Flanders.
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Original: Dendermonde town centre Two children and an woman have been stabbed to death at a creche in Dendermondein Belgiumby a knife wielding man . Officials say that two children and a female adult were confirmed to have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the creche in East Flanders.
Revised: Dendermonde town centre Two children and an woman have been stabbed to death by a knife-wielding man at a crèche in Dendermonde, Belgium . Officials say that two children and a female adult were confirmed to have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the creche in East Flanders.
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Original: Dendermonde town centre Two children and an woman have been stabbed to death at a creche in Dendermondein Belgiumby a knife wielding man . Officials say that two children and a female adult were confirmed to have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the creche in East Flanders.
Revised: Dendermonde town centre Two children and an woman have been stabbed to death at a creche in Dendermondein Belgiumby a knife wielding man . Officials confirmed that two children and a female adult were confirmed to have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the creche in East Flanders.
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Original: Dendermonde town centre Two children and an woman have been stabbed to death at a creche in Dendermondein Belgiumby a knife wielding man . Officials say that two children and a female adult were confirmed to have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the creche in East Flanders.
Revised: Dendermonde town centre Two children and an woman have been stabbed to death at a creche in Dendermondein Belgiumby a knife wielding man . Officials say that two children and a female adult have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the creche in East Flanders.
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Original: Dendermonde town centre Two children and an woman have been stabbed to death at a creche in Dendermondein Belgiumby a knife wielding man . Officials say that two children and a female adult were confirmed to have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the creche in East Flanders.
Revised: Dendermonde town centre Two children and an woman have been stabbed to death at a creche in Dendermondein Belgiumby a knife wielding man . Officials say that two children and a female adult were confirmed to have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the crèche in East Flanders.
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Original:  BBC News has reported that Peter Cleymans , of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre , as telling Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know ".
Revised:  BBC News has reported that Peter Cleymans of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre , as telling Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know ".
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Original:  BBC News has reported that Peter Cleymans , of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre , as telling Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know ".
Revised:  BBC News has reported that Peter Cleymans , of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre told the Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know ".
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Original:  BBC News has reported that Peter Cleymans , of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre , as telling Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know ".
Revised:  BBC News has reported that Peter Cleymans , of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre , as telling Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know ."
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Original:  Eleven children and two other women were injured, three of the children critically, according to Reuters.
Revised:  11 children and two other women were injured, three of the children critically, according to Reuters.
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Original:  The Associated Press reports local prosecutor Christian Du Four telling a news conference  "We have three people dead and 10 in various hospitals." VTM, a Flemish commercial television station, have reported three children and two adults as having died.
Revised:  The Associated Press reports local prosecutor Christian Du Four telling a news conference , "We have three people dead and 10 in various hospitals." VTM, a Flemish commercial television station, have reported three children and two adults as having died.
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Original:  The alleged attacker, said to be aged around 30, rang the doorbell of the creche at 0900 UTC (1000 local), then ran upstairs when the door was opened.
Revised:  The alleged attacker, said to be around 30, rang the doorbell of the creche at 0900 UTC (1000 local), then ran upstairs when the door was opened.
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Original:  The alleged attacker, said to be aged around 30, rang the doorbell of the creche at 0900 UTC (1000 local), then ran upstairs when the door was opened.
Revised:  The alleged attacker, said to be aged around 30, rang the doorbell of the crèche at 0900 UTC (1000 local), then ran upstairs when the door was opened.
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Original:  State broadcaster VRT described the man as being local, whilst AP reports Leene Du Bois, a Flemish government official, as saying that he had no connection with the creche .
Revised:  State broadcaster VRT described the man as being local, whilst AP reports Leene Du Bois, a Flemish government official, as saying that he had no connection with the crèche .
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Original:  The creche had 18 children in its care, with six adults in attendance.
Revised:  The crèche had 18 children in its care, with six adults in attendance.
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Original:  Officials confirmed that two children and a female adult have died after being stabbed by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the crèche in East Flanders.
Revised:  Officials have confirmed that the deaths occurred due to knife wounds inflicted by an unidentified man wearing white face paint with blackened eyes, who arrived by bicycle at the crèche in East Flanders.
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Original: BBC News has reported that Peter Cleymans of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre told the Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know."
Revised: BBC News reported that Peter Cleymans of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre told the Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know."
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Original: Dendermonde town centre Two children and a woman have been stabbed to death by a knife-wielding man at a crèche (day care center) in Dendermonde, Belgium.
Revised:  Two children and a woman have been stabbed to death by a knife-wielding man at a crèche (day care center) in Dendermonde, Belgium.
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Original:   BBC News reported that Peter Cleymans of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre told the Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know."
Revised:  Dendermonde town centre BBC News reported that Peter Cleymans of the Dendermonde Ambulance Centre told the Reuters news agency that a further "ten, 15, 20 are injured, I don't know."
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Original:  He fled the scene by bicycle and was arrested at 1030 UTC.
Revised:  He fled the scene by bicycle and was arrested at 10:30 UTC.
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Original: For the third time this week, an earthquake shook the state of California.
Revised: For the third time this week, a sizeable earthquake shook the state of California.
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Original:  other Pacific earthquakes, including one in the Aleutian Islands and another in Chile, have also occurred in recent days  
Revised:  other Pacific earthquakes, including one in the Aleutian Islands and another in Chile, have also occurred in recent days . 
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Original:  other Pacific earthquakes, including one in the Aleutian Islands and another in Chile, have also occurred in recent days . Geologists at Caltech affirmed that the quake was too weak to cause structural damage to buildings.
Revised:  other Pacific earthquakes, including one in the Aleutian Islands and another in Chile, have also occurred in recent days Geologists at Caltech affirmed that the quake was too weak to cause structural damage to buildings.
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Original:  The  4.9-scale tremor, thought to have originated 79 miles east of Los Angeles, comes on the tail of two other quakes, including a 7.2 quake off the coast of Northern California which briefly triggered tsunami warnings Tuesday night.
Revised:  The 4.9-scale tremor, appearing to have originated 79 miles east of Los Angeles, comes on the tail of two other quakes, including a 7.2 quake off the coast of Northern California which briefly triggered tsunami warnings Tuesday night.
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Original: Geologists at Caltech affirmed that the quake was too weak to cause structural damage to buildings.
Revised: Geologists at the California Institute of Technology (Caltech) affirmed that the quake was too weak to cause structural damage to buildings.
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Original: Southern California was shook by a sizeable earthquake for the third time this week.
Revised: A sizable earthquake shook Southern California for the third time this week.
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Original:  Pacific Time on Thursday , and reached most parts of Southern California by 1:54 p.m.
Revised:  Pacific Time on Thursday and reached most parts of Southern California by 1:54 p.m.
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Original:  The 4.9-scale tremor, appearing to have originated 79 miles east of Los Angeles, comes on the tail of two other quakes, including a 7.2  quake off the coast of Northern California which briefly triggered tsunami warnings Tuesday night.
Revised:  The 4.9-scale tremor, appearing to have originated 79 miles east of Los Angeles, comes on the tail of two other quakes, including a 7.2 magnitude quake off the coast of Northern California which briefly triggered tsunami warnings Tuesday night.
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Original:  this was followed by a 1.5\% contraction in the following quarter , it has been revealed . "The increased rate of decline in output was due to weaker services and production industries output," commented the Office for National Statistics in a statement released today.
Revised:  this was followed by a 1.5\% contraction in the following quarter . "The increased rate of decline in output was due to weaker services and production industries output," commented the Office for National Statistics in a statement released today.
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Original:  The current global financial crisis was triggered by the subprime mortgage crisis in the US  
Revised:  The current global financial crisis was triggered by the subprime mortgage crisis in the US . 
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Original:  Kennedy was one of the approximately 20 candidates that Governor Patterson said he considered for the position, including state congressmen Carolyn Maloney and Jerrold Nadler.
Revised:  Kennedy was one of the approximately 20 candidates that Governor Patterson said he considered for the position, including fellow New York Congressmen Carolyn Maloney and Jerrold Nadler.
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Original:  She was mainly criticized for her opinion on gun control laws, including her stance opposing restrict parts of the Second Amendment to the United States Constitution, which outlines the right of citizens to bear arms, earning her support by the National Rifle Association.
Revised:  She was mainly criticized for her opinion on gun control laws, including her stance opposing restrictions on parts of the Second Amendment to the United States Constitution, which outlines the right of citizens to bear arms, earning her support by the National Rifle Association.
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Original:  David Paterson,  governor of New York, appointed Kirsten Gillibrand as the replacement in the United States Senate for Hillary Clinton today, who left the position to become Secretary of State in Barack Obama's administration.
Revised:  David Paterson, the governor of New York, appointed Kirsten Gillibrand as the replacement in the United States Senate for Hillary Clinton today, who left the position to become Secretary of State in Barack Obama's administration.
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Original:  Cuomo was the top choice according to voter opinion polls, according to CNN.
Revised:  Cuomo was the top choice in voter opinion polls, according to CNN.
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Original:   David Paterson, the governor of New York, appointed Kirsten Gillibrand as the replacement in the United States Senate for Hillary Clinton today , who left the position to become Secretary of State in Barack Obama's administration.
Revised:  Today, David Paterson, the governor of New York, appointed Kirsten Gillibrand as the replacement in the United States Senate for Hillary Clinton today , who left the position to become Secretary of State in Barack Obama's administration.
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Original:   David Paterson, the governor of New York, appointed Kirsten Gillibrand as the replacement in the United States Senate for Hillary Clinton today , who left the position to become Secretary of State in Barack Obama's administration.
Revised:  David Paterson, the governor of New York, appointed Kirsten Gillibrand as the replacement in the United States Senate for Hillary Clinton , who left the position to become Secretary of State in Barack Obama's administration.
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Original: This selection came after Caroline Kennedy, the daughter of former President John F. Kennedy and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from consideration on January 21 for the seat  due to unstated personal reasons.
Revised: This selection came after Caroline Kennedy, the daughter of former President John F. Kennedy and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from consideration for the seat due to unstated personal reasons.
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Original: Gillibrand, age 42, was a member of the House of Representatives from Hudson and is, like Clinton, a member of the Democratic Party.
Revised: Gillibrand, 42, was a member of the House of Representatives from Hudson and is, like Clinton, a member of the Democratic Party.
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Original:  She is dynamic, she is articulate, she is perceptive, she is outspoken," said Patterson at a news conference.
Revised:  She is dynamic, she is articulate, she is perceptive, she is outspoken," said Paterson at a news conference.
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Original:  This selection came after Caroline Kennedy, the daughter of former President John F. Kennedy and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from  consideration for the seat on January 21 due to unstated personal reasons.
Revised:  This selection came after Caroline Kennedy, the daughter of former President John F. Kennedy and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from the consideration for the seat on January 21 due to unstated personal reasons.
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Original:  This selection came after Caroline Kennedy, the daughter of former President John F. Kennedy and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from  consideration for the seat on January 21 due to unstated personal reasons.
Revised:  This selection came after Caroline Kennedy, the daughter of former President John F. Kennedy and leading candidate for the job, withdrew from consideration for the seat on January 21 due to unspecified personal reasons.
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Original:  Kennedy was one of the approximately 20 candidates that Governor Patterson said he considered for the position, including fellow New York Congressmen Carolyn Maloney and Jerrold Nadler.
Revised:  Kennedy was one of approximately 20 candidates that Governor Patterson said he considered for the position, including fellow New York Congressmen Carolyn Maloney and Jerrold Nadler.
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Original:  Kennedy was one of the approximately 20 candidates that Governor Patterson said he considered for the position, including fellow New York Congressmen Carolyn Maloney and Jerrold Nadler.
Revised:  Kennedy was one of the approximately 20 candidates that Governor Paterson said he considered for the position, including fellow New York Congressmen Carolyn Maloney and Jerrold Nadler.
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Original:  Clinton expressed approval of Patterson's appointment . "Kirsten is an intelligent and dedicated public servant and a dear friend.
Revised:  Clinton expressed approval of the appointment in a statement: "Kirsten is an intelligent and dedicated public servant and a dear friend.
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Original:  I'm pleased that this seat, which has been my great honor to hold, and which has in its history been held by leaders like former Senators Daniel Patrick Moynihan and Robert F. Kennedy, will be in such capable hands , " said a statement made by Clinton.
Revised:  I'm pleased that this seat, which has been my great honor to hold, and which has in its history been held by leaders like former Senators Daniel Patrick Moynihan and Robert F. Kennedy, will be in such capable hands . " said a statement made by Clinton.
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Original:  I'm pleased that this seat, which has been my great honor to hold, and which has in its history been held by leaders like former Senators Daniel Patrick Moynihan and Robert F. Kennedy, will be in such capable hands , " said a statement made by Clinton.
Revised:  I'm pleased that this seat, which has been my great honor to hold, and which has in its history been held by leaders like former Senators Daniel Patrick Moynihan and Robert F. Kennedy, will be in such capable hands , " 
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Original:  President Obama also approved of her, stating  "Kirsten has been a strong voice for transparency and reform in government and shares the belief that government should be open, accessible and work for all our citizens."
Revised:  President Obama also approved of her, stating , "Kirsten has been a strong voice for transparency and reform in government and shares the belief that government should be open, accessible and work for all our citizens."
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