wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   Space Shuttle Discovery launches Solid rocket booster separation was triggered two minutes and five seconds into the flight after burnout of the putty-like fuel packed inside each rocket.
Revised:  Space Shuttle Discovery launch. Solid rocket booster separation was triggered two minutes and five seconds into the flight after burnout of the putty-like fuel packed inside each rocket.
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Original: With the ascent into space complete and fuel onboard the external tank exhausted, Discovery jettisoned the orange canister.
Revised: With the ascent into space complete and fuel in the external tank exhausted, Discovery jettisoned the orange canister.
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Original:  Residents of the Chicago suburb of Naperville, Illinois celebrated Evan Lysacek Day last Friday.
Revised: Evan Lysacek Residents of the Chicago suburb of Naperville, Illinois celebrated Evan Lysacek Day last Friday.
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Original: The skater's acheivements have inspired the residents of his hometown.
Revised: The skater's achievements have inspired the residents of his hometown.
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Original:  On Saturday Button placed 4th behind both Red Bull's and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from the earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won Australian GP for the second time in his career    
Revised:  On Saturday Button placed 4th behind both Red Bull's and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from the earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won Australian GP for the second time in his career . 
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Original:  On Saturday Button placed 4th behind both Red Bull 's and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from the earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won  Australian GP for the second time in his career.
Revised:  Button placed fourth behind both Red Bull 's and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from the earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won Australian GP for the second time in his career.
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Original:  On Saturday Button placed 4th behind both Red Bull 's and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from the earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won  Australian GP for the second time in his career.
Revised:  On Saturday Button placed 4th behind both Red Bull cars and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from the earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won Australian GP for the second time in his career.
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Original:  On Saturday Button placed 4th behind both Red Bull 's and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from the earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won  Australian GP for the second time in his career.
Revised:  On Saturday Button placed 4th behind both Red Bull 's and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from an earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won Australian GP for the second time in his career.
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Original:  On Saturday Button placed 4th behind both Red Bull 's and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from the earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won  Australian GP for the second time in his career.
Revised:  On Saturday Button placed 4th behind both Red Bull 's and Alonso's Ferrari, but took advantage from the earlier tyre change from intermediate to slick and won the Australian GP for the second time in his career.
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Original:  Pole-sitter Sebastian Vettel lead for the first half of the race, but missed the corner after a brake failure.
Revised:  Pole-sitter Sebastian Vettel led for the first half of the race, but missed the corner after a brake failure.
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Original:  Pole-sitter Sebastian Vettel lead for the first half of the race, but missed the corner after a brake failure.
Revised:  Pole-sitter Sebastian Vettel lead for the first half of the race, missing a corner after a brake failure.
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Original:  The quite a pace for Renault of Robert Kubica resulted in a second place finish after starting 9th , ahead of the Ferrari cars of Felipe Massa and Fernando Alonso.
Revised:  The quick pace for Renault of Robert Kubica resulted in a second place finish after starting 9th , ahead of the Ferrari cars of Felipe Massa and Fernando Alonso.
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Original:  The quite a pace for Renault of Robert Kubica resulted in a second place finish after starting 9th , ahead of the Ferrari cars of Felipe Massa and Fernando Alonso.
Revised:  The quite a pace for Renault of Robert Kubica resulted in a second place finish after starting ninth , ahead of the Ferrari cars of Felipe Massa and Fernando Alonso.
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Original:  His team-mate rookie Petrov was out after an error on his 10th lap.
Revised:  His team-mate , rookie Petrov, went out after an error on his 10th lap.
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Original:  His team-mate rookie Petrov was out after an error on his 10th lap.
Revised:  His team-mate rookie Petrov was out after an error on his tenth lap.
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Original:  Button's team-mate Lewis Hamilton and Vettel's team-mate Mark Webber closely followed Kubica and  Ferraris, but after an unsuccessful overtaking attempt from Lewis,  Australian driver knocked his car's rear and they found themselves in the gravel.
Revised:  Button's team-mate , Lewis Hamilton, and Vettel's team-mate Mark Webber closely followed Kubica and Ferraris, but after an unsuccessful overtaking attempt from Lewis, Australian driver knocked his car's rear and they found themselves in the gravel.
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Original:  Button's team-mate Lewis Hamilton and Vettel's team-mate Mark Webber closely followed Kubica and  Ferraris, but after an unsuccessful overtaking attempt from Lewis,  Australian driver knocked his car's rear and they found themselves in the gravel.
Revised:  Button's team-mate Lewis Hamilton and Vettel's team-mate , Mark Webber, closely followed Kubica and Ferraris, but after an unsuccessful overtaking attempt from Lewis, Australian driver knocked his car's rear and they found themselves in the gravel.
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Original:  Button's team-mate Lewis Hamilton and Vettel's team-mate Mark Webber closely followed Kubica and  Ferraris, but after an unsuccessful overtaking attempt from Lewis,  Australian driver knocked his car's rear and they found themselves in the gravel.
Revised:  Button's team-mate Lewis Hamilton and Vettel's team-mate Mark Webber closely followed Kubica and the Ferraris, but after an unsuccessful overtaking attempt from Lewis, Australian driver knocked his car's rear and they found themselves in the gravel.
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Original:  Button's team-mate Lewis Hamilton and Vettel's team-mate Mark Webber closely followed Kubica and  Ferraris, but after an unsuccessful overtaking attempt from Lewis,  Australian driver knocked his car's rear and they found themselves in the gravel.
Revised:  Button's team-mate Lewis Hamilton and Vettel's team-mate Mark Webber closely followed Kubica and Ferraris, but after an unsuccessful overtaking attempt from Lewis, the Australian driver knocked his car's rear and they found themselves in the gravel.
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Original:  While in gravel Webber was overtaken by Vitantonio Liuzzi (Force India) and Rubens Barrichello (Williams).
Revised:  While in the gravel, Webber was overtaken by Vitantonio Liuzzi (Force India) and Rubens Barrichello (Williams).
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Original:  Top ten was closed by seven time world champion Michael Schumacher (Mercedes), who struggled behind Jaime Alguersuari (Toro Rosso) for the most of the race  after a contact with Alonso in the first corner from start of the race.
Revised:  The top ten was closed by seven time world champion Michael Schumacher (Mercedes), who struggled behind Jaime Alguersuari (Toro Rosso) for the most of the race after a contact with Alonso in the first corner from start of the race.
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Original:  Top ten was closed by seven time world champion Michael Schumacher (Mercedes), who struggled behind Jaime Alguersuari (Toro Rosso) for the most of the race  after a contact with Alonso in the first corner from start of the race.
Revised:  Top ten was closed by seven-time world champion Michael Schumacher (Mercedes), who struggled behind Jaime Alguersuari (Toro Rosso) for the most of the race after a contact with Alonso in the first corner from start of the race.
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Original:  Top ten was closed by seven time world champion Michael Schumacher (Mercedes), who struggled behind Jaime Alguersuari (Toro Rosso) for the most of the race  after a contact with Alonso in the first corner from start of the race.
Revised:  Top ten was closed by seven time world champion Michael Schumacher (Mercedes), who struggled behind Jaime Alguersuari (Toro Rosso) for most of the race after a contact with Alonso in the first corner from start of the race.
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Original:  Top ten was closed by seven time world champion Michael Schumacher (Mercedes), who struggled behind Jaime Alguersuari (Toro Rosso) for the most of the race  after a contact with Alonso in the first corner from start of the race.
Revised:  Top ten was closed by seven time world champion Michael Schumacher (Mercedes), who struggled behind Jaime Alguersuari (Toro Rosso) for the most of the race , after a contact with Alonso in the first corner from start of the race.
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Original:  The race spectators saw only 14 of 24 drivers at the finish line.
Revised:  The race spectators saw only fourteen of the 24 drivers at the finish line.
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Original:  The race spectators saw only 14 of 24 drivers at the finish line.
Revised:  The race spectators saw only 14 of 24 drivers reach the finish line.
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Original:  Championship standings currently  still topped by Alonso with 37 points with Massa and Button 4 and 6 points behind respectively.
Revised:  Championship standings currently are still topped by Alonso with 37 points with Massa and Button 4 and 6 points behind respectively.
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Original:  Championship standings currently  still topped by Alonso with 37 points with Massa and Button 4 and 6 points behind respectively.
Revised:  Championship standings currently still topped by Alonso with 37 points , Massa and Button 4 and 6 points behind respectively.
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Original:  Championship standings currently  still topped by Alonso with 37 points with Massa and Button 4 and 6 points behind respectively.
Revised:  Championship standings currently still topped by Alonso with 37 points with Massa and Button coming four and six6 points behind respectively.
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Original:  Ferrari is now in lead of the constructor's standings with 70 points with a distance of 16 points from McLaren
Revised:  Ferrari now lead the constructor's standings with 70 points with a distance of 16 points from McLaren
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Original:  Ferrari is now in lead of the constructor's standings with 70 points with a distance of 16 points from McLaren
Revised:  Ferrari is now in lead of the constructor's standings with 70 points , sixteen points ahead of McLaren
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Original:  The car then appears to have carried on into the garden and hit a big pine tree.  
Revised:  The car then appears to have carried on into the garden and hit a big pine tree. " 
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Original:  The two occupants of the vehicle were both teenagers, with one being male calum mathison and the other being female.
Revised:  The two occupants of the vehicle were both teenagers, with one being male and the other being female.
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Original: Callum Matheson and Adairia MacDonald, both 17, were both travelling in a black Škoda Fabia vRS at approximately 0920 BST on Sunday when they attempted to negotiate a corner and ended up colliding with a stone wall and a tree, according to witnesses.
Revised: They were both travelling in a black Škoda Fabia vRS at approximately 0920 BST on Sunday when they attempted to negotiate a corner and ended up colliding with a stone wall and a tree, according to witnesses.
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Original:  In the NCAA Ice Hockey western regional finals played last night at the Xcel Energy Center in St. Paul, Minnesota the Wisconsin Badgers beat the St. Cloud State Huskies 5-3.
Revised:  In the Autocratic Ice Hockey western regional finals played last night at the Xcel Energy Center in St. Paul, Minnesota the Wisconsin Badgers beat the St. Cloud State Huskies 5-3.
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Original:  Rochester Institute of Technology is the Atlantic Hockey champions and the 15th seed in the 16 team NCAA tournament.
Revised:  Rochester Institute of Technology is the Atlantic Hockey champions and the fifteenth seed in the 16 team NCAA tournament.
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Original:  Rochester Institute of Technology is the Atlantic Hockey champions and the 15th seed in the 16 team NCAA tournament.
Revised:  Rochester Institute of Technology is the Atlantic Hockey champions and the 15th seed in the sixteen team NCAA tournament.
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Original:  Wisconsin has now reached the Frozen Four twelve times and is the number 3 seed in the 16 team tournament .
Revised:  Wisconsin has now reached the Frozen Four twelve times .
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Original:  The Wisconsin Badgers will face East Regional champion Rochester Institute of Technology Tigers in the national semifinals April 8th at Ford Field in Detroit, Michigan
Revised:  The Wisconsin Badgers will face East Regional champion Rochester Institute of Technology Tigers in the national semifinals April 8 at Ford Field in Detroit, Michigan
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Original:  Rochester Institute of Technology  is the Atlantic Hockey champions and the fifteenth seed in the sixteen team NCAA tournament.
Revised:  Rochester Institute of Technology (RIT) is the Atlantic Hockey champions and the fifteenth seed in the sixteen team NCAA tournament.
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Original:  RIT goalie Jared DeMichiel  who stopped 63 shots out of 66  was named the East Region most outstanding player.
Revised:  RIT goalie Jared DeMichiel , who stopped 63 shots out of 66 was named the East Region most outstanding player.
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Original:  RIT goalie Jared DeMichiel  who stopped 63 shots out of 66  was named the East Region most outstanding player.
Revised:  RIT goalie Jared DeMichiel who stopped 63 shots out of 66 was named the East Regional most outstanding player.
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Original:  Rochester Institute of Technology (RIT) is the Atlantic Hockey champions and the fifteenth seed in the sixteen team NCAA tournament.
Revised:  Rochester Institute of Technology is the Atlantic Hockey champions and the fifteenth seed in the sixteen team NCAA tournament.
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Original:  RIT goalie Jared DeMichiel , who stopped 63 shots out of 66 across the weekend (including 24 of 26 against UNH), was named the East Regional most outstanding player.
Revised:  RIT goalie Jared DeMichiel , who stopped 63 shots out of 66 was named the East Regional most outstanding player.
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Original:  Among them are Eastman Kodak, Hewlett-Packard and Kimberly-Clark  
Revised:  Among them are Eastman Kodak, Hewlett-Packard and Kimberly-Clark . 
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Original: Private consumer spending is considered to be the backbone of the U.S. economy since it accounts for for two-thirds of its Gross Domestic Product.
Revised: Private consumer spending is considered to be the backbone of the U.S. economy since it accounts for two-thirds of its Gross Domestic Product.
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Original: Michael Shields, an 18-year old Liverpool Football Club supporter has been wrongly for the attempted murder of a Bulgarian barman, despite another man  admitting full responsibility.
Revised: Michael Shields, an 18-year old Liverpool Football Club supporter has been jailed for the attempted murder of a Bulgarian barman, despite another man admitting full responsibility.
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Original: Michael Shields, an 18-year old Liverpool Football Club supporter has been wrongly for the attempted murder of a Bulgarian barman, despite another man  admitting full responsibility.
Revised: Michael Shields, an 18-year old Liverpool Football Club supporter has been wrongly for the attempted murder of a Bulgarian barman, despite another man from Liverpool admitting full responsibility.
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Original:  Shields, 18 from Wavertree was charged with the attempted murder of Martin Georgiev, 25, after being accused of throwing a brick at the barman's head during celebrations in the resort of Varna, where his football clubbeat AC Milan in the final of the Champions League in Istanbul in May.
Revised:  Shields, 18 from Wavertree was charged with the attempted murder of Martin Georgiev, 25, after being accused of throwing a brick at the barman's head in the resort of Varna, where his football clubbeat AC Milan in the final of the Champions League in Istanbul in May.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Liverpool Riverside MP Louise Ellman, has backed the family's campaign calling the incident a "travesty of justice . "  A  Foreign Office spokesman said it could not comment on the verdict but said it would continue offering consular help to Michael Shields
Revised:  Meanwhile, Liverpool Riverside MP Louise Ellman, has backed the family's campaign calling the incident a "travesty of justice " A Foreign Office spokesman said it could not comment on the verdict but said it would continue offering consular help to Michael Shields
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Original:  Meanwhile, Liverpool Riverside MP Louise Ellman, has backed the family's campaign calling the incident a "travesty of justice . "  A  Foreign Office spokesman said it could not comment on the verdict but said it would continue offering consular help to Michael Shields
Revised:  Meanwhile, Liverpool Riverside MP Louise Ellman, has backed the family's campaign calling the incident a "travesty of justice . " . A Foreign Office spokesman said it could not comment on the verdict but said it would continue offering consular help to Michael Shields
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Original:  " A British Foreign Office spokesman said it could not comment on the verdict but said it would continue offering consular help to Michael Shields         
Revised:  " A British Foreign Office spokesman said it could not comment on the verdict but said it would continue offering consular help to Michael Shields . 
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Original: Shields, 18 from Wavertree was charged with the attempted murder of Martin Georgiev, 25, after being accused of throwing a brick at the barman's head in the resort of Varna, where he was celebrating Liverpool football club's win over AC Milan in the final of the Champions League in Istanbul in May.
Revised: Shields, 18 from Wavertree was charged with the attempted murder of Martin Georgiev, 25, after being accused of throwing a brick at the barman's head in the city of Varna, where he was celebrating Liverpool football club's win over AC Milan in the final of the Champions League in Istanbul in May.
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Original:  The development came after long-time justice campaigner Stephen Jakobi held closed talks with Bulgarian ambassador Lachezav Matev at the Bulgarian Embassy in London.
Revised:  The development came after long-time justice campaigner Stephen Jakobi held closed talks with Bulgarian ambassador Lachezar Matev at the Bulgarian Embassy in London.
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Original:  Three days, 40 wickets (sic) and in the end two runs decided it," said Gibbs     
Revised:  Three days, 40 wickets (sic) and in the end two runs decided it," said Gibbs . 
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Original: The Russian government has decided to remove two of its eleven timezones , in the country's first step towards time reform, first started by president Dmitry Medvedev in last November.
Revised: The Russian government has decided to remove two of its eleven timezones in the country's first step towards time reform, first started by president Dmitry Medvedev in last November.
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Original: The Russian government has decided to remove two of its eleven timezones , in the country's first step towards time reform, first started by president Dmitry Medvedev in last November.
Revised: The Russian government has decided to remove two of its eleven timezones , in the country's first step towards time reform, first started by president Dmitry Medvedev last November.
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Original:  The affected regions were Chukotka, the easternmost province of Russia were moved back an hour, as were and Samara and Udmurtia, which are now on Moscow time.
Revised:  The affected regions were Chukotka, the eastern-most province of Russia were moved back an hour, as were and Samara and Udmurtia, which are now on Moscow time.
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Original:  The affected regions were Chukotka, the easternmost province of Russia were moved back an hour, as were and Samara and Udmurtia, which are now on Moscow time.
Revised:  The affected regions were Chukotka, the easternmost province of Russia , which was moved back an hour, as were and Samara and Udmurtia, which are now on Moscow time.
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Original:  The affected regions were Chukotka, the easternmost province of Russia were moved back an hour, as were and Samara and Udmurtia, which are now on Moscow time.
Revised:  The affected regions were Chukotka, the easternmost province of Russia were moved back an hour, as were Samara and Udmurtia, which are now on Moscow time.
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Original:  however, affected areas instead didn't change their clocksat all . "Reducing of amount of time zones is very efficient for managing, for accordance of actions, for approximation of far regions to the center  ," commented Arkady Tishkov, who is a deputy science director of Geography Institution for the Russian Academy of Sciences.
Revised:  however, affected areas instead didn't change their clocksat all . "Reducing the number of time zones is very efficient for managing, for accordance of actions, for approximation of far regions to the center ," commented Arkady Tishkov, who is a deputy science director of Geography Institution for the Russian Academy of Sciences.
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Original:  however, affected areas instead didn't change their clocksat all . "Reducing of amount of time zones is very efficient for managing, for accordance of actions, for approximation of far regions to the center  ," commented Arkady Tishkov, who is a deputy science director of Geography Institution for the Russian Academy of Sciences.
Revised:  however, affected areas instead didn't change their clocksat all . "Reducing of amount of time zones is very efficient for managing, for coordinating activities, and for maintaining the connection of far-off regions to the center ," commented Arkady Tishkov, who is a deputy science director of Geography Institution for the Russian Academy of Sciences.
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Original:  however, affected areas instead didn't change their clocksat all . "Reducing of amount of time zones is very efficient for managing, for accordance of actions, for approximation of far regions to the center  ," commented Arkady Tishkov, who is a deputy science director of Geography Institution for the Russian Academy of Sciences.
Revised:  however, affected areas instead didn't change their clocksat all . "Reducing of amount of time zones is very efficient for managing, for accordance of actions, for approximation of far regions to the center of the country ," commented Arkady Tishkov, who is a deputy science director of Geography Institution for the Russian Academy of Sciences.
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