wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: A 1995 education PhD from the University of Waikato  titled ' Te tātari i te kaupapa' , looked at ways the New Zealand qualifications framework could be used as a tool for indigenous knowledge to be integrated and recognised as a valid part of the education system in New Zealand After working at the University of Otago, Ka'ai moved to the Auckland University of Technology with John Moorfield.
Revised: A 1995 education PhD from the University of Waikato , with thesis titled ' Te tātari i te kaupapa' , looked at ways the New Zealand qualifications framework could be used as a tool for indigenous knowledge to be integrated and recognised as a valid part of the education system in New Zealand After working at the University of Otago, Ka'ai moved to the Auckland University of Technology with John Moorfield.
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Original:  She is a strong advocate for te reo being compulsory in New Zealand schools 
Revised:  She is a strong advocate for te reo being compulsory in New Zealand schools .
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Original: Background Whitney White was a studio art major in college with  concentration in Graphic design.
Revised: Background Whitney White was a studio art major in college with a concentration in Graphic design.
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Original:  Although initially posting videos on YouTube was just a way  help others and relieve stress .
Revised:  Although initially posting videos on YouTube was just a way to help others and relieve stress .
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Original:  Her YouTube channel “Naptural85” now has over 900k subscribers and millions of views as her story continues to inspire women with the same or similar hair type.
Revised:  Her YouTube channel “Naptural85” now has over 900k subscribers and millions of views . Her story continues to inspire women with the same or similar hair type.
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Original:  Whitney White, the natural hair vlogger mostly known as Naptural85 on YouTube,  is also a reliable source of information regarding current issues facing the natural hair community.
Revised:  Best known as Naptural85 on YouTube, is also a reliable source of information regarding current issues facing the natural hair community.
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Original:  Whitney White, the natural hair vlogger mostly known as Naptural85 on YouTube,  is also a reliable source of information regarding current issues facing the natural hair community.
Revised:  Whitney White, the natural hair vlogger mostly known as Naptural85 on YouTube, White is also a reliable source of information regarding current issues facing the natural hair community.
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Original:  She has worked with major brands like Carol's Daughter and this is how the 29 years old has become a force in the black hair industry.
Revised:  She has worked with major brands like Carol's Daughter and has become a force in the black hair industry.
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Original:  The Naptural85 brand is known for natural hairstyles including how-to styles, natural DIY treatments, and industry knowledge.
Revised:  The Naptural85 brand is known for natural haircare including how-to styles, natural DIY treatments, and industry knowledge.
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Original:  The Naptural85 brand is known for natural hairstyles including how-to styles, natural DIY treatments, and industry knowledge.
Revised:  The Naptural85 brand is known for natural hairstyles including how-to styles, DIY treatments, and industry knowledge.
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Original:  Her work has been appreciated by public figures including Dominique Dawes and Kelly Rowland , they've revealed how delighted they are with her easy and helpful tips, informative tutorials and tricks for maintaining their hairstyle .
Revised:  Her work has been appreciated by public figures including Dominique Dawes and Kelly Rowland who have revealed how delighted they are with her easy and helpful tips, informative tutorials and tricks for maintaining their hairstyle .
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Original:  Her work has been appreciated by public figures including Dominique Dawes and Kelly Rowland , they've revealed how delighted they are with her easy and helpful tips, informative tutorials and tricks for maintaining their hairstyle .
Revised:  Her work has been appreciated by public figures including Dominique Dawes and Kelly Rowland , they've revealed how delighted they are with her easy and helpful tips, informative tutorials and tricks for maintaining their hairstyles .
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Original:  Her natural hairstyles and hair routines have helped many who are struggling with their naturally curly hair come to love and maintain their beautiful hair   .
Revised:  Her natural hairstyles and hair routines have helped many who are struggling with their naturally curly hair come to love and maintain their beautiful hair . .
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Original: Whitney White known as a vlogger, blogger, and natural hair enthusiast Naptural85 on YouTube .
Revised: Whitney White , known as Naptural85 on YouTube, is a vlogger, blogger, and natural hair enthusiast Naptural85 on YouTube .
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Original: Whitney White known as a vlogger, blogger, and natural hair enthusiast Naptural85 on YouTube .
Revised: Whitney White known as a vlogger, blogger, natural hair enthusiast Naptural85 on YouTube .
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Original:  Since the South Pole is located on the Antarctic continent, a modification of the standard grid is not required, while the North Pole, which is located in the Arctic Ocean, is not required., is replaced by two points located one in North America and the other in Siberia.
Revised:  Since the South Pole is located on the Antarctic continent, a modification of the standard grid is not required, while the North Pole, which is located in the Arctic Ocean, is replaced by two points located one in North America and the other in Siberia.
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Original:  Outside the United States, particularly in Canada and Europe, the truncated term urea is used (though it is still the same blood chemical)and the units are  different (mmol/L).
Revised:  Outside the United States, particularly in Canada and Europe, the term urea is used (though it is still the same blood chemical)and the units are different (mmol/L).
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Original:  Outside the United States, particularly in Canada and Europe, the truncated term urea is used (though it is still the same blood chemical)and the units are  different (mmol/L).
Revised:  Outside the United States, particularly in Canada and Europe, the truncated term urea is used (though it is still the same blood chemical)and the units are also different (mmol/L).
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Original: Love service is a ritualized form of male ' love-devotion ' toward women, especially noble women, that was popularized in the Middle Ages.
Revised: Love service is a ritualized form of male love-devotion ' toward women, especially noble women, that was popularized in the Middle Ages.
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Original: Love service is a ritualized form of male ' love-devotion ' toward women, especially noble women, that was popularized in the Middle Ages.
Revised: Love service is a ritualized form of male ' love-devotion toward women, especially noble women, that was popularized in the Middle Ages.
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Original: Islander's Castle is home to the Governor Glenda Ecleo, of Dinagat Islands, although not open to public the home can be viewed from the gates.
Revised: Islander's Castle is a residence of Governor Glenda Ecleo, of Dinagat Islands, although not open to public the home can be viewed from the gates.
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Original:  Category:History of Dinagat Islands Category:Culture of Dinagat Islands Category:Landmarks in the Philippines Category:History of the Philippines Category:Monuments and memorials in the Philippines Category:National Monuments of the Philippin
Revised:  Category:History of Dinagat Islands Category:Culture of Dinagat Islands Category:Landmarks in the Philippines Category:History of the Philippin
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Original: Islander's Castle is a residence of Governor Glenda Ecleo, of Dinagat Islands , although not open to public the home can be viewed from the gates.
Revised: Islander's Castle is a residence of Governor Glenda Ecleo, of Dinagat Islands . Although not open to public the home can be viewed from the gates.
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Original: Islander's Castle is a residence of Governor Glenda Ecleo, of Dinagat Islands , although not open to public the home can be viewed from the gates.
Revised: Islander's Castle is a residence of Governor Glenda Ecleo, of Dinagat Islands , although not open to the public, the home can be viewed from the gates.
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Original: Meijer, J. R. , Huijbregts, M. A. J. , Schotten, C. G. J. and Schipper, A. M. (2018).
Revised: Meijer, J. R. ; Huijbregts, M. A. J. , Schotten, C. G. J. and Schipper, A. M. (2018).
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Original: Meijer, J. R. , Huijbregts, M. A. J. , Schotten, C. G. J. and Schipper, A. M. (2018).
Revised: Meijer, J. R. , Huijbregts, M. A. J. ; Schotten, C. G. J. and Schipper, A. M. (2018).
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Original: Meijer, J. R. , Huijbregts, M. A. J. , Schotten, C. G. J. and Schipper, A. M. (2018).
Revised: Meijer, J. R. , Huijbregts, M. A. J. , Schotten, C. G. J. Schipper, A. M. (2018).
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Original:   Global patterns of current and future road infrastructure  . Environmental Research Letters , 13 (6), 064006.
Revised:  " Global patterns of current and future road infrastructure . Environmental Research Letters , 13 (6), 064006.
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Original:   Global patterns of current and future road infrastructure  . Environmental Research Letters , 13 (6), 064006.
Revised:  Global patterns of current and future road infrastructure " . Environmental Research Letters , 13 (6), 064006.
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Original:   Global patterns of current and future road infrastructure  . Environmental Research Letters , 13 (6), 064006.
Revised:  Global patterns of current and future road infrastructure . Environmental Research Letters . 13 (6), 064006.
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Original:  URL The anticipated length of new paved roads to be built between 2010 and 2050 would encircle the planet more than 600 times.
Revised:  The anticipated length of new paved roads to be built between 2010 and 2050 would encircle the planet more than 600 times.
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Original: Laurance, W.F., Clements, G.R., Sloan, S., O ’ Connell, C.S., Mueller, N.D., Goosem, M., Venter, O., Edwards, D.P., Phalan, B., Balmford, A., et al. (2014).
Revised: Laurance, W.F., Clements, G.R., Sloan, S., O ' Connell, C.S., Mueller, N.D., Goosem, M., Venter, O., Edwards, D.P., Phalan, B., Balmford, A., et al. (2014).
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Original:  Road investments, spatial spillovers, and deforestation in the brazilian amazon.
Revised:  Road investments, spatial spillovers, and deforestation in the Brazilian amazon.
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Original:  E.A., Aba ’ a,
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Original:  In Africa, upgraded and proposed road-development corridors intersected 345 protected areas, of which 69 were high value protected areas (national parks, World Heritage site, RAMSAR site).
Revised:  In Africa, upgraded and proposed road-development corridors intersected 345 protected areas, of which 69 were high value protected areas (national parks, World Heritage site, Ramsar site).
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Original:  In the Democratic Republic of  Congo, urban markets are subject to greater control by soldiers than are rural markets, resulting in hunters and farmers paying more protection money and getting less of a share of profits made.
Revised:  In the Democratic Republic of the Congo, urban markets are subject to greater control by soldiers than are rural markets, resulting in hunters and farmers paying more protection money and getting less of a share of profits made.
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Original:  In the Democratic Republic of  Congo, more large-bodied and endangered animals are hunted for sale in urban markets than in rural markets.
Revised:  In the Democratic Republic of the Congo, more large-bodied and endangered animals are hunted for sale in urban markets than in rural markets.
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Original: Grant, U. (2008) Opportunity and exploitation in urban labour markets London: Overseas Development Institute Reducing the Impacts of Road Expansion There are a few ways of reducing its impacts.
Revised: Grant, U. (2008) Opportunity and exploitation in urban labour markets London: Overseas Development Institute Reducing the impacts of road expansion There are a few ways of reducing its impacts.
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Original:  Expanding existing roads Following the ‘ first-cut-is-the-deepest ’ dictum, the expansion or upgrading of roads in previously settled areas is believed to cause less environmental impact per kilometre of road development than where new roads penetrate intact forest landscapes.
Revised:  Expanding existing roads Following the ' first-cut-is-the-deepest ’ dictum, the expansion or upgrading of roads in previously settled areas is believed to cause less environmental impact per kilometre of road development than where new roads penetrate intact forest landscapes.
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Original:  Expanding existing roads Following the ‘ first-cut-is-the-deepest ’ dictum, the expansion or upgrading of roads in previously settled areas is believed to cause less environmental impact per kilometre of road development than where new roads penetrate intact forest landscapes.
Revised:  Expanding existing roads Following the ‘ first-cut-is-the-deepest ' dictum, the expansion or upgrading of roads in previously settled areas is believed to cause less environmental impact per kilometre of road development than where new roads penetrate intact forest landscapes.
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Original:  Indonesia ’ s development corridors as per its Master Development Plan,CMEA (2011).
Revised:  Indonesia ' s development corridors as per its Master Development Plan,CMEA (2011).
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Original:  Many roads in remote areas have uncertain socio-economic benefits and surprisingly high economic, social, and environmental risks, and a cost-benefit analysis of 33 planned ‘development corridors’ in sub-Saharan Africa concluded that less than one-fifth of the projects were clearly justified.
Revised:  Many roads in remote areas have uncertain socio-economic benefits and surprisingly high economic, social, and environmental risks, and a cost-benefit analysis of 33 planned 'development corridors' in sub-Saharan Africa concluded that less than one-fifth of the projects were clearly justified.
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Original:  In Africa, upgraded and proposed road-development corridors intersected 345 protected areas, of which 69 were high value protected areas (national parks, World Heritage site , Ramsar site).
Revised:  In Africa, upgraded and proposed road-development corridors intersected 345 protected areas, of which 69 were high value protected areas (national parks, World Heritage Site , Ramsar site).
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Original:  Tyuiénon was elected Vice President of New Caledonia on 11 March 2011 in the collegial cabinet of Harold Martin and held that position until 5 June URL As of 2018, he continues to be a member of the collegial URL
Revised:  Tyuiénon was elected Vice President of New Caledonia on 11 March 2011 in the collegial cabinet of Harold Martin and held that position until 5 June URL As of 2018, he continues to be a member of the collegial government.
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Original:  Tyuiénon was elected Vice President of New Caledonia on 11 March 2011 in the collegial cabinet of Harold Martin and held that position until 5 June 2014.
Revised:  Tyuiénon-was elected Vice President of New Caledonia on 11 March 2011 in the collegial cabinet of Harold Martin and held that position until 5 June 2014.
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Original:  It hosts a diverse biological community that includes bristlemouths, blobfish, bioluminescent jellyfish, giant squid, and a myriad of other unique organisms adapted to live in a low-light environment.
Revised:  It hosts a diverse biological community that includes bristlemouths, blobfish, bioluminescent jellyfish, giant squid, and myriad other unique organisms adapted to live in a low-light environment.
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Original:  The biological community of the mesopelagic zone has adapted to a low-light, low-food  .
Revised:  The biological community of the mesopelagic zone has adapted to a low-light, low-food environment .
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Original: Deep-See WHOI is currently working on a project to characterize and document the mesopelagic ecosystem.
Revised: Deep-See WHO is currently working on a project to characterize and document the mesopelagic ecosystem.
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Original: Deep-See WHOI is currently working on a project to characterize and document the mesopelagic ecosystem.
Revised: Deep-See WHOI is currently working on a project to characterize and document the pelagic ecosystem.
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Original:  Another estimate puts mesopelagic fish biomass at 1 billion tons.
Revised:  Another estimate puts mesopelagic fish biomass at about one billion tons.
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Original:  A 2008 study put the world marine fish biomass at between 0.8 and 2 billion tons , a number roughly comparable with a 1980 estimate of mesopelagic fish biomass (about one billion tons).
Revised:  A 2008 study estimated the world marine fish biomass at between 0.8 and 2 billion tons , a number roughly comparable with a 1980 estimate of mesopelagic fish biomass (about one billion tons).
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Original: Quuurh ( also known as al-Ma'abiyat, was the principal settlement of Wadi al-Qura and is identified with the ruins of al-Ma'abiyat in Wadi al-'Ula, eighteen kilometers southeast of the oasis al Qura.
Revised: Qurh, also known as al-Ma'abiyat, was the principal settlement of Wadi al-Qura and is identified with the ruins of al-Ma'abiyat in Wadi al-'Ula, eighteen kilometers southeast of the oasis al Qura.
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Original:   There are numerous references to the place in the medievalArabic sources.
Revised:  history There are numerous references to the place in the medievalArabic sources.
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Original: Timothy Power, The Red Sea from Byzantium to the Caliphate: AD 500–1000(I.B.Tauris, 2012) p116. while Yaqut says it was a very fertile valley covered in villages from end to end, and indeed the modern name of the wadi  means valley of villages.
Revised: Timothy Power, The Red Sea from Byzantium to the Caliphate: AD 500–1000(I.B.Tauris, 2012) p116. while Yaqut says it was a very fertile valley covered in villages from end to end, and indeed the modern name of the wadi still means valley of villages.
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Original:  Al-Muqaddasi   says palm trees skirt [Qurh]  it is possessed of very cheep dates and excellent and copious springs of watersee also [Abu al-Faraj al-Isfahani|Al-Isfahani]] of which Yakut numbers 80 springs of water .
Revised:  Al-Muqaddasi says palm trees skirt [Qurh] ... it is possessed of very cheep dates and excellent and copious springs of watersee also [Abu al-Faraj al-Isfahani|Al-Isfahani]] of which Yakut numbers 80 springs of water .
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Original:  Al-Muqaddasi   says palm trees skirt [Qurh]  it is possessed of very cheep dates and excellent and copious springs of watersee also [Abu al-Faraj al-Isfahani|Al-Isfahani]] of which Yakut numbers 80 springs of water .
Revised:  Al-Muqaddasi says palm trees skirt [Qurh] it is possessed of very cheap dates and excellent and copious springs of watersee also [Abu al-Faraj al-Isfahani|Al-Isfahani]] of which Yakut numbers 80 springs of water .
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Original:  Al-Muqaddasi   says palm trees skirt [Qurh]  it is possessed of very cheep dates and excellent and copious springs of watersee also [Abu al-Faraj al-Isfahani|Al-Isfahani]] of which Yakut numbers 80 springs of water .
Revised:  Al-Muqaddasi says palm trees skirt [Qurh] it is possessed of very cheep dates and excellent and copious springs of watersee also [Abu al-Faraj al-Isfahani|Al-Isfahani]] of which Yakut numbers 80 springs .
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Original:  Al-Muqaddasi adds it had a very diverse population.
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Original: history There are numerous references to the place in the medievalArabic sources.
Revised: history There are numerous references to the place in the medieval Arabic sources.
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Original: history There are numerous references to the place in the medieval Arabic sources.
Revised: History There are numerous references to the place in the medieval Arabic sources.
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Original:  Excavation begun in 1985.
Revised:  Excavation began in 1985.
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Original:  For example  al Muqad-dasi described Qurh as the largest town in the hijaz ...after Mecca, as well as the most flourishing and populous. al-Istakhri says that among the towns of the hijaz, Wadi al Qura is second only to al Yamama in size and production.
Revised:  For example , al Muqad-dasi described Qurh as the largest town in the hijaz ...after Mecca, as well as the most flourishing and populous. al-Istakhri says that among the towns of the hijaz, Wadi al Qura is second only to al Yamama in size and production.
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Original:  Al-Muqaddasi also says palm trees skirt [Qurh]... it is possessed of very cheap dates  and excellent and copious springs of watersee also [Abu al-Faraj al-Isfahani|Al-Isfahani]] of which Yakut numbers 80 springs.
Revised:  Al-Muqaddasi also says palm trees skirt [Qurh]... it is possessed of very cheap dates , and excellent and copious springs of watersee also [Abu al-Faraj al-Isfahani|Al-Isfahani]] of which Yakut numbers 80 springs.
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Original:  Category:History of Saudi Arabia Category:Geography of Saudi ArabiaHistory of Saudi Arabi
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Original:  Category:1951 births Category:2014 deaths Category:Afghan activists Category:Afghan male writers Category:20th-century Afghan writers Category:21st-century Afghan writers Category:Afghan journalists Category:Hazara write
Revised:  Category:1951 births Category:2014 deaths Category:Afghan activists Category:Afghan male writers Category:20th-century Afghan writers Category:21st-century Afghan writers Category:Afghan journalists Category:Hazara writers Category:Hazara peop
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Original: Orthophoria  condition of binocular fixation in which the lines of vision meet at the object toward which they are directed, and considered as a normal condition of balance of the ocular muscles of the two eyes.
Revised: Orthophoria is a condition of binocular fixation in which the lines of vision meet at the object toward which they are directed, and considered as a normal condition of balance of the ocular muscles of the two eyes.
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Original:  It can refer to any process that originates within an organism ( is endogenous) and responds to the environment (entrained by the environment).
Revised:  It can refer to any process that originates within an organism ( i.e., endogenous) and responds to the environment (entrained by the environment).
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Original:  These 24-hour rhythms are driven by a circadian clock, and they have been widely observed in plants, animals, fungi , and cyanobacteria.
Revised:  These 24-hour rhythms are driven by a circadian clock, and they have been widely observed in plants, animals, fungi and cyanobacteria.
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Original:  He noted that 24-hour patterns in the movement of the leaves of the plant Mimosa pudica persisted  even when the plants were kept in constant darkness.
Revised:  He noted that 24-hour patterns in the movement of the leaves of the plant Mimosa pudica persisted , even when the plants were kept in constant darkness.
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