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Original: Courtship disorder is a theoretical construct in sexology in which a certain set of paraphilias are seen as specific instances of anomalous courtship instincts  .
Revised: Courtship disorder is a theoretical construct in sexology in which a certain set of paraphilias are seen as specific instances of anomalous courtship instincts in men .
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Original:  The specific paraphilias are exhibitionism , voyeurism, telephone scatologia, toucherism, frotteurism, and biastophilia (paraphilic rape) .
Revised:  The specific paraphilias are biastophilia (paraphilic rape), exhibitionism, frotteurism , voyeurism, telephone scatologia, toucherism, frotteurism, and biastophilia (paraphilic rape) .
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Original:  The specific paraphilias are exhibitionism , voyeurism, telephone scatologia, toucherism, frotteurism, and biastophilia (paraphilic rape) .
Revised:  The specific paraphilias are exhibitionism , telephone scatologia, toucherism, frotteurism, and biastophilia (paraphilic rape) .
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Original:  The specific paraphilias are exhibitionism , voyeurism, telephone scatologia, toucherism, frotteurism, and biastophilia (paraphilic rape) .
Revised:  The specific paraphilias are exhibitionism , voyeurism, telephone scatologia, toucherism, and voyeurism .
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Original:  Freund, K., Kolářský, A. (1965).
Revised:  Kolářský, A. (1965).
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Original:  "Grundzüge eines einfachen bezugsystems für die analyse sexueller deviationen"%DIFDELCMD < [%%% "Basic features of a reference system for considering anomalous erotic preferences" . Psychiatrie, Neurologie, and Medizinische Psychologie, 17, 221–225.
Revised:  "Grundzüge eines einfachen bezugsystems für die analyse sexueller deviationen"%DIFDELCMD < [%%% . Psychiatrie, Neurologie, and Medizinische Psychologie, 17, 221–225.
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Original:  "Grundzüge eines einfachen bezugsystems für die analyse sexueller deviationen"%DIFDELCMD < [%%% "Basic features of a reference system for considering anomalous erotic preferences" . Psychiatrie, Neurologie, and Medizinische Psychologie, 17, 221–225.
Revised:  "Grundzüge eines einfachen bezugsystems für die analyse sexueller deviationen"%DIFDELCMD < [%%% "Basic features of a reference system for considering anomalous erotic preferences" 
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Original:  Courtship disorder offers an underlying common cause for these paraphilias in men to explain this co-occurrence.
Revised:  The courtship disorder model offers an underlying common cause for these paraphilias in men to explain this co-occurrence.
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Original:  The specific paraphilias are biastophilia (paraphilic rape), exhibitionism, frotteurism, telephone scatologia, toucherism, and voyeurism.
Revised:  The specific paraphilias are biastophilia (paraphilic rape), exhibitionism, frotteurism, telephone scatologia, and voyeurism.
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Original: Courtship disorder is a theoretical construct in sexology in which a certain set of paraphilias are seen as specific instances of anomalous courtship instincts in men .
Revised: Courtship disorder is a theoretical construct in sexology in which a certain set of paraphilias are seen as specific instances of anomalous courtship instincts in humans .
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Original:  According to the courtship disorder hypothesis, there is a species-typical courtship process in human males consisting of four phases, and anomalies in different phases result in one of these paraphilic sexual interests.
Revised:  According to the courtship disorder hypothesis, there is a species-typical courtship process in humans consisting of four phases, and anomalies in different phases result in one of these paraphilic sexual interests.
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Original: Paraliterature is an academic term for written works dismissed as not literary.
Revised: Paraliterature comprises written works dismissed as not literary.
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Original:    Criticism On the term "paraliterature", Ursula K.
Revised:  :361 Criticism On the term "paraliterature", Ursula K.
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Original:   It includes commercial fiction, popular fiction, pulp fiction, comic books and, most notably, genre fiction with works of science fiction, fantasy, mystery and others.:361
Revised:  Examples It includes commercial fiction, popular fiction, pulp fiction, comic books and, most notably, genre fiction with works of science fiction, fantasy, mystery and others.:361
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Original: Examples It includes commercial fiction, popular fiction, pulp fiction, comic books and, most notably, genre fiction with works of science fiction, fantasy, mystery and others.
Revised:  It includes commercial fiction, popular fiction, pulp fiction, comic books and, most notably, genre fiction with works of science fiction, fantasy, mystery and others.
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Original: :361 Introduction of Term The term was introduced by art critic and scholar Rosalind Krauss in her text 'Poststructuralism and the "Paraliterary"' (1980).
Revised: :361 The term was introduced by art critic and scholar Rosalind Krauss in her text 'Poststructuralism and the "Paraliterary"' (1980).
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Original:  but it is not the space of unity, coherence, or resolution that we think of as constituting the work of literature.':37 She links the paraliterary to postmodern literature, noting 'it is not surprising that the medium of a postmodernist literature should be the critical text wrought into a paraliterary form.':37 Criticism On the term "paraliterature", Ursula K.
Revised:  but it is not the space of unity, coherence, or resolution that we think of as constituting the work of literature.':37 She links the paraliterary to postmodern literature, noting 'it is not surprising that the medium of a postmodernist literature should be the critical text wrought into a paraliterary form.':37 On the term "paraliterature", Ursula K.
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Original:  April 1910 – 7 May 1965) was a general in the  People's Liberation Army of the People's Republic of China, first commander-in-chief of the People's Liberation Army Air Force , as well as chief of staff of Lin Biao's army group during the Chinese Civil War, occupied the whole of Manchuria in 1948 and captured 472,000 Nationalist troops in the Liaoshen Campaign.
Revised:  April 1910 – 7 May 1965) was a general in the Chinese People's Liberation Army of the People's Republic of China, first commander-in-chief of the People's Liberation Army Air Force , as well as chief of staff of Lin Biao's army group during the Chinese Civil War, occupied the whole of Manchuria in 1948 and captured 472,000 Nationalist troops in the Liaoshen Campaign.
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Original:  April 1910 – 7 May 1965) was a general in the  People's Liberation Army of the People's Republic of China, first commander-in-chief of the People's Liberation Army Air Force , as well as chief of staff of Lin Biao's army group during the Chinese Civil War, occupied the whole of Manchuria in 1948 and captured 472,000 Nationalist troops in the Liaoshen Campaign.
Revised:  April 1910 – 7 May 1965) was a general in the People's Liberation Army who served as the inaugural commander-in-chief of the People's Liberation Army Air Force , as well as chief of staff of Lin Biao's army group during the Chinese Civil War, occupied the whole of Manchuria in 1948 and captured 472,000 Nationalist troops in the Liaoshen Campaign.
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Original:  April 1910 – 7 May 1965) was a general in the  People's Liberation Army of the People's Republic of China, first commander-in-chief of the People's Liberation Army Air Force , as well as chief of staff of Lin Biao's army group during the Chinese Civil War, occupied the whole of Manchuria in 1948 and captured 472,000 Nationalist troops in the Liaoshen Campaign.
Revised:  April 1910 – 7 May 1965) was a general in the People's Liberation Army of the People's Republic of China, first commander-in-chief of the PLA Air Force During the Chinese Civil War, he was chief of staff of Lin Biao's army group during the Chinese Civil War, occupied the whole of Manchuria in 1948 and captured 472,000 Nationalist troops in the Liaoshen Campaign.
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Original:  April 1910 – 7 May 1965) was a general in the  People's Liberation Army of the People's Republic of China, first commander-in-chief of the People's Liberation Army Air Force , as well as chief of staff of Lin Biao's army group during the Chinese Civil War, occupied the whole of Manchuria in 1948 and captured 472,000 Nationalist troops in the Liaoshen Campaign.
Revised:  April 1910 – 7 May 1965) was a general in the People's Liberation Army of the People's Republic of China, first commander-in-chief of the People's Liberation Army Air Force , as well as chief of staff of Lin Biao's army group , which occupied the entire Manchuria in 1948 and captured 472,000 Nationalist troops in the Liaoshen Campaign.
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Original:  Early life Liu was born in Wuping  , Fujian province of China.
Revised:  Early life Liu was born in Wuping , China.
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Original: Russia Liu was sent to study in Frunze Military Academy in 1939 — 1941, and was commissioned as a major in the Soviet Red Army and participated in the Soviet-German War, and wrote several important essays on Battle of Stalingrad.
Revised: Russia Liu was sent to study in Frunze Military Academy in 1939 – 1941, and was commissioned as a major in the Soviet Red Army and participated in the Soviet-German War, and wrote several important essays on Battle of Stalingrad.
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Original:  These included his memoirs as the Chief of Staff of the Northeastern Field Army during the Manchurian Campaign in 1947-49 , and books concerning Stalin and his subordinates.
Revised:  These included his memoirs as the Chief of Staff of the Northeastern Field Army during the Manchurian Campaign in 1947–49 , and books concerning Stalin and his subordinates.
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Original: Illness Lin Biao never visited the sick before, but only exception when he learnt Liu Yalou had liver cancer, Lin then visited Liu for the first time in the hospital.
Revised: Illness Lin Biao never visited the sick before, but only exception when he learned Liu Yalou had liver cancer, Lin then visited Liu for the first time in the hospital.
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Original:  His Chickasaw father, Charles Tate  , is a classically trained pianist and baritone, who played at home as well as in professional performance.
Revised:  His father, Charles Tate , is a classically trained pianist and baritone, who played at home as well as in professional performance.
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Original:  His parents were influential in encouraging his work in music , and by accompanying his father to tribal events, Jerod heard much American Indian music among the peoples of Oklahoma.
Revised:  His parents were influential in encouraging his work in music . By accompanying his father to tribal events, Jerod heard much American Indian music among the peoples of Oklahoma.
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Original:  It is his inherited traditional Chickasaw  house name,  traditionally used in a manner similar to a European-American surname.
Revised:  It is his inherited traditional Chickasaw " house name, traditionally used in a manner similar to a European-American surname.
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Original:  It is his inherited traditional Chickasaw  house name,  traditionally used in a manner similar to a European-American surname.
Revised:  It is his inherited traditional Chickasaw house name, " traditionally used in a manner similar to a European-American surname.
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Original:  Shortly before he began his piano studies at the Cleveland Institute of Music, his mother Dr. Patricia Tate commissioned his first composition, asking him for a ballet score.
Revised:  Shortly before Tate began his piano studies at the Cleveland Institute of Music, his mother Dr. Patricia Tate commissioned his first composition, asking him for a ballet score.
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Original:  He wrote Winter Moons, exploring traditions of the tribes from the Northern Plains and Rockies , which premiered at the University of Wyoming in 1992.
Revised:  He wrote Winter Moons, exploring traditions of the tribes from the Northern Plains and Rockies . It premiered at the University of Wyoming in 1992.
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Original:  He found this was a way to combine American Indian tradition and classical training.
Revised:  He found composition to be a way to combine American Indian tradition and classical training.
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Original:  Tate has said an important influence was Hungarian composer Béla Bartók,  ”the first ethnomusicologist that was aware of his own folk music;
Revised:  Tate has said an important influence was Hungarian composer Béla Bartók, saying he was ”the first ethnomusicologist that was aware of his own folk music;
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Original:  he did it so naturally and so joyfully that I felt the same impulse to do the same thing from where I come from.” (includes video) Career In 1994 Dr. Bill Burkhardt held a convention in Boulder, Colorado about and with American Indian composers, who have highlight their innovations in working with traditional instruments and forms within classical music structure.
Revised:  he did it so naturally and so joyfully that I felt the same impulse to do the same thing from where I come from.” (includes video) Career In 1994 Dr. Bill Burkhardt held a convention in Boulder, Colorado about and with American Indian composers, who have made innovations by working with traditional instruments and forms within classical music structure.
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Original:  His works have been commissioned and performed by the National Symphony Orchestra, The San Francisco Symphony and San Francisco Symphony Chorus, The Detroit Symphony, the Winnipeg Symphony Orchestra, the Buffalo Philharmonic Orchestra, the South Dakota Symphony Orchestra, Colorado Ballet, Canterbury Choral Society, among others.
Revised:  Tate's works have been commissioned and performed by the National Symphony Orchestra, The San Francisco Symphony and San Francisco Symphony Chorus, The Detroit Symphony, the Winnipeg Symphony Orchestra, the Buffalo Philharmonic Orchestra, the South Dakota Symphony Orchestra, Colorado Ballet, Canterbury Choral Society, among others.
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Original:  All three recordings were recorded, produced  and released on the Grammy Award-winning label, Azica Records.
Revised:  All three recordings were recorded, produced , and released on the Grammy Award-winning label, Azica Records.
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Original: 20th-century  classical composers Category:
Revised: 20th-century American composers Category:21st-century American composers Category:20th-century American male musicians Category:21st-century American male musicians Category:20th-century classical composers Category:
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Original: 21st-century classical composers Category:  American male classical composers Category:American classical composers Category:Chickasaw people Category:Cleveland Institute of Music alumni Category:Manx people Category: Native American composers Category:Northwestern University alumni Category: Musicians from Norman, Oklahoma Category: 21st-century American composers Category: 20th-century American composers Category:20th-century American male musicians Category:21st-century American male musicia
Revised: 21st-century classical composers Category: 20th-century Native Americans Category:21st-century Native Americans Category: American male classical composers Category:American classical composers Category:Chickasaw people Category:Cleveland Institute of Music alumni Category:Manx people Category: Native American composers Category:Northwestern University alumni Category: Musicians from Norman, Oklahoma Category: 21st-century American composers Category: 20th-century American composers Category:20th-century American male musicians Category:21st-century American male musicia
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Original: 21st-century classical composers Category:  American male classical composers Category:American classical composers Category:Chickasaw people Category:Cleveland Institute of Music alumni Category:Manx people Category: Native American composers Category:Northwestern University alumni Category: Musicians from Norman, Oklahoma Category: 21st-century American composers Category: 20th-century American composers Category:20th-century American male musicians Category:21st-century American male musicia
Revised: 21st-century classical composers Category: American male classical composers Category:American classical composers Category:Chickasaw people Category:Cleveland Institute of Music alumni Category:Manx people Category: Musicians from Norman, Oklahoma Category: 21st-century American composers Category: 20th-century American composers Category:20th-century American male musicians Category:21st-century American male musicia
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Original: 21st-century classical composers Category:  American male classical composers Category:American classical composers Category:Chickasaw people Category:Cleveland Institute of Music alumni Category:Manx people Category: Native American composers Category:Northwestern University alumni Category: Musicians from Norman, Oklahoma Category: 21st-century American composers Category: 20th-century American composers Category:20th-century American male musicians Category:21st-century American male musicia
Revised: 21st-century classical composers Category: American male classical composers Category:American classical composers Category:Chickasaw people Category:Cleveland Institute of Music alumni Category:Manx people Category: Native American composers Category:Northwestern University alumni Category: Musicians from Norman, Oklahoma Category: Native American composers Category: 20th-century American composers Category:20th-century American male musicians Category:21st-century American male musicia
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Original: 21st-century classical composers Category:  American male classical composers Category:American classical composers Category:Chickasaw people Category:Cleveland Institute of Music alumni Category:Manx people Category: Native American composers Category:Northwestern University alumni Category: Musicians from Norman, Oklahoma Category: 21st-century American composers Category: 20th-century American composers Category:20th-century American male musicians Category:21st-century American male musicia
Revised: 21st-century classical composers Category: American male classical composers Category:American classical composers Category:Chickasaw people Category:Cleveland Institute of Music alumni Category:Manx people Category: Native American composers Category:Northwestern University alumni Category: Musicians from Norman, Oklahoma Category: 21st-century American composers Category: Northwestern University alum
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Original: The lowest ignition energy value occurs at the stoichiometric combustion concentration.
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Original: The minimum ignition energy  is a safety-related quantity which determines the ignition capability of fuel-air mixtures  .
Revised: The minimum ignition energy (MIE) is a safety-related quantity which determines the ignition capability of fuel-air mixtures .
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Original:  It is defined as the minimum electrical energy stored in a capacitor, which, when discharged, is sufficient to ignite the most ignitable mixture of gas or dust and air under specified test conditions  . References
Revised:  It is defined as the minimum electrical energy stored in a capacitor, which, when discharged, is sufficient to ignite the most ignitable mixture of fuel and air under specified test conditions . References
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Original:  Obesity is defined as having a body mass index (BMI) greater than or equal to 30 kg/m2, and in June 2013 the American Medical Association classified it as a disease , with much controversy .
Revised:  Obesity is defined as having a body mass index (BMI) greater than or equal to 30 kg/m2, and in June 2013 the American Medical Association classified it as a disease .
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Original: In popular culture File:Werthersuicide.jpg|Young Werther after his suicide%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Unrequited love has been a frequent subject in popular culture.
Revised:  File:Werthersuicide.jpg|Young Werther after his suicide%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Unrequited love has been a frequent subject in popular culture.
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Original: In popular culture File:Werthersuicide.jpg|Young Werther after his suicide%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Unrequited love has been a frequent subject in popular culture.
Revised: In popular culture %DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Unrequited love has been a frequent subject in popular culture.
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Original:  In Margaret Mitchell's 1936 novel Gone with the Wind the main character Scarlett O'Hara feels unrequited love towards Ashley Wilkes.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In Billy Bragg's song The Saturday Boy, the young protagonist looks up the word "unrequited" in the dictionary whilst in the state of unrequited love.
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Original:  One of the better examples of unrequited love is Frank Ocean's "Bad Religion".
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Joan Armatrading's 1972 song It Could Have Been Better deals with the subject.
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Original:  Unrequited Love is a pop album by actress singer songwriter Hillary Hawkins with songs such as "Missing URL Advantages [[Image:Dante and beatrice.jpg|Dante looks longingly at Beatrice Portinari (in yellow) as she passes by him with Lady Vanna (in red) in Dante and Beatrice, by Henry Holiday]] Unrequited love has long been depicted as noble, an unselfish and stoic willingness to accept suffering.
Revised:  Advantages [[Image:Dante and beatrice.jpg|Dante looks longingly at Beatrice Portinari (in yellow) as she passes by him with Lady Vanna (in red) in Dante and Beatrice, by Henry Holiday]] Unrequited love has long been depicted as noble, an unselfish and stoic willingness to accept suffering.
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Original: Pippin, p. 326n Examples of unrequited love include Stendhal, Dante, Hans Christian Andersen, and Goethe.
Revised: Pippin, p. 326n 
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Original: Rejectors 'There are two bad sides to unrequited love, but only one is made familiar by our culture'"To love or be loved in vain: The trials and tribulations of unrequited love.
Revised: Rejecters 'There are two bad sides to unrequited love, but only one is made familiar by our culture'"To love or be loved in vain: The trials and tribulations of unrequited love.
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Original:  He is an award-winning film documentary maker based in Kabul and has been working in the war-torn country and abroad for the past 13 years.
Revised:  He is a film documentary maker based in Kabul and has been working in the war-torn country and abroad for the past 13 years.
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Original:  In adults who have had their lower leg cast , braced, or otherwise immobilized for more than a week, LMWH may decrease the risk and severity of deep vein thrombosis, but does not have any effect on the incidence of pulmonary embolism . LMWH is recommended for adults not in hospital with an above-knee cast and a below-knee cast, and is safe for this indication.
Revised:  In adults who have had their lower leg casted , braced, or otherwise immobilized for more than a week, LMWH may decrease the risk and severity of deep vein thrombosis, but does not have any effect on the incidence of pulmonary embolism . LMWH is recommended for adults not in hospital with an above-knee cast and a below-knee cast, and is safe for this indication.
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