wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Cain dropped out in December 160 0.1\% - Jeff Lawman 125 0.1 \% - Christopher Hill 105 0.0\% - Benjamin Linn 85 0.0\% - Michael Meehan 51 0.0\% - Keith Drummond 41 0.0\% - Joe Story 41 0.0\% - Bear Betzler 29 0.0\% - Joe Robinson 26 0.0\% - 24 0.0\% - Mark Callahan 20 0.0\% - 19 0.0\% - Linden Swift 18 0.0\% - Timothy Brewer 15 0.0\% - Vern Wuensche 15 0.0\% - John Davis 14 0.0\% - Randy Crow 12 0.0\% - Hugh Cort 3 0.0\% - James Vestermark 3 0.0\% -
Revised:  Cain dropped out in December 160 0.1\% - Jeff Lawman 125 0.1 \% - Christopher Hill 105 0.0\% - Benjamin Linn 85 0.0\% - Michael Meehan 51 0.0\% - Keith Drummond 41 0.0\% - Joe Story 41 0.0\% - Bear Betzler 29 0.0\% - Joe Robinson 25 0.0\% - 24 0.0\% - Mark Callahan 20 0.0\% - 19 0.0\% - Linden Swift 18 0.0\% - Timothy Brewer 15 0.0\% - Vern Wuensche 15 0.0\% - John Davis 14 0.0\% - Randy Crow 12 0.0\% - Hugh Cort 3 0.0\% - James Vestermark 3 0.0\% -
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Original:  It is believed that the slides where triggered by heavy rains and a possible earthquake.
Revised:  It is believed that the slides were triggered by heavy rains and a possible earthquake.
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Original:  It is believed that the slides where triggered by heavy rains and a possible earthquake.
Revised:  It is believed that the slides where triggered by heavy rains and possibly an earthquake.
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Original:   Houses and an elementary school packed with children were buried, officials and witnesses said.
Revised:  Some residents had already left the area previous to the disaster fearing landslides but had returned following easing of the rain. Houses and an elementary school packed with children were buried, officials and witnesses said.
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Original:  Internet photographs and footage show only coconut trees and a few tin roofs sticking out of the soil after part of a mountainside collapsed on the farming village of Guinsaugon in Southern Leyte province.
Revised:  Photographs and footage show only coconut trees and a few tin roofs sticking out of the soil after part of a mountainside collapsed on the farming village of Guinsaugon in Southern Leyte province.
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Original: BBC News is now reporting that at least 83 people were rescued after a massive landslide buried three villages in Saint Bernard town , Southern Leyte province, in central Philippines, Friday.
Revised: BBC News is now reporting that at least 83 people were rescued after a massive landslide buried three villages in Saint Bernard , Southern Leyte province, in central Philippines, Friday.
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Original:  "Rescuers are scared because they can still hear the mountain rumbling," said Maria Lim, the mayor of Saint Bernard town , where a minor earthquake was felt on Friday morning.
Revised:  "Rescuers are scared because they can still hear the mountain rumbling," said Maria Lim, the mayor of Saint Bernard , where a minor earthquake was felt on Friday morning.
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Original:   19 people have so far been confirmed dead.
Revised:  So far, 19 people have so far been confirmed dead.
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Original:   19 people have so far been confirmed dead.
Revised:  19 people have been confirmed dead.
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Original: MPs at the British Parliament have voted by majority of over 200 to bring in legislation banning smoking in all pubs, clubs and workplaces  .
Revised: MPs at the British Parliament have voted by large majority of 200 to bring in legislation banning smoking in all pubs, clubs and workplaces .
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Original: Harry Whittington, the person who got shot by Vice President Dick Cheney in a hunting accident, was released from the hospital today.
Revised: Harry Whittington, the person who was shot by Vice President Dick Cheney in a hunting accident, was released from the hospital today.
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Original:  He added that Whittington was "a lucky person" to survive the shooting  
Revised:  He added that Whittington was "a lucky person" to survive the shooting . 
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Original:  He rulled out any commentary about preliminary investigations, which had been subject to the criticism of Maître Gerbade, attorney for the plaintifs , during his requisitory.
Revised:  He ruled out any commentary about preliminary investigations, which had been subject to the criticism of Maître Gerbade, attorney for the plaintifs , during his requisitory.
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Original:  He rulled out any commentary about preliminary investigations, which had been subject to the criticism of Maître Gerbade, attorney for the plaintifs , during his requisitory.
Revised:  He rulled out any commentary about preliminary investigations, which had been subject to the criticism of Maître Gerbade, attorney for the plaintiffs , during his requisitory.
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Original:  "One minute and ten seconds" at most passed before the rope was cut by Deiss, one minute of "confusion and general mess", according tot he court.
Revised:  "One minute and ten seconds" at most passed before the rope was cut by Deiss, one minute of "confusion and general mess", according to the court.
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Original:  The warnings put by the militants ("do not shoot" and "Stop here or you will kill two people") were seen by the Court as "ambiguous" at best, and "incomprehensible" at worst, since the militants were sitting  the highway, a dangerous place where their own lives were in jeopardy.
Revised:  The warnings put by the militants ("do not shoot" and "Stop here or you will kill two people") were seen by the Court as "ambiguous" at best, and "incomprehensible" at worst, since the militants were sitting on the highway, a dangerous place where their own lives were in jeopardy.
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Original:  Denying any will to call the attention of the offence commited by the plaintifs , the Court however the lack of security rope, of signals, of notification to the authorities and the possibility for the militants to rope themselves at 4 or 5 metres high rather than 25.
Revised:  Denying any will to call the attention of the offence committed by the plaintiffs , the Court however the lack of security rope, of signals, of notification to the authorities and the possibility for the militants to rope themselves at 4 or 5 metres high rather than 25.
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Original: The Japan Aerospace Exploration Agency have successfully launched another of their H-IIA space rockets , which is planned to send its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, into orbit on 21st February.
Revised: The Japan Aerospace Exploration Agency have successfully launched another of their H-IIA space rockets . Its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, into orbit on 21st February.
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Original:  The MTSAT-2 satellite is owned by the Civil Aviation Bureau and the Japan Meteorological Agency, part of the Ministry of Land, Infrastructure and Transport.
Revised:  The satellite is owned by the Civil Aviation Bureau and the Japan Meteorological Agency, part of the Ministry of Land, Infrastructure and Transport.
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Original: The Japan Aerospace Exploration Agency have successfully launched another of their H-IIA space rockets.
Revised: The Japan Aerospace Exploration Agency has successfully launched another of their H-IIA space rockets.
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Original:  Its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, has successfully seperated from the rocket, and is due to be inserted into a geostationary orbit on 21st February.
Revised:  Its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, has successfully separated from the rocket, and is due to be inserted into a geostationary orbit on 21st February.
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Original:  It is the ninth in a series of H-IIA rockets, which form the main part of the Japanese space programme .
Revised:  It is the ninth in a series of H-IIA rockets, which form the main part of the Japanese space program .
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Original:  Related Articles Ariane 5 rocket launch postpone
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Original:  Related Articles Ariane 5 rocket launch postpone
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Original:  The H5N1 strain of bird flu, which has killed at least 90 people since early 2003, can infect humans in close contact with bird
Revised:  The H5N1 strain of bird flu, which has killed at least 90 people since early 2003, can infect humans in close contact with birds
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Original: Nandurbar , Maharashtra Nandurbar In Maharashtra The first case of Avian Bird Flu has been registered in the world's second most populous country, India.
Revised: Nandurbar In Maharashtra Nandurbar In Maharashtra The first case of Avian Bird Flu has been registered in the world's second most populous country, India.
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Original: Nandurbar , Maharashtra Nandurbar In Maharashtra The first case of Avian Bird Flu has been registered in the world's second most populous country, India.
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Original: Nandurbar , Maharashtra Nandurbar In Maharashtra The first case of Avian Bird Flu has been registered in the world's second most populous country, India.
Revised: Nandurbar , Maharashtra Nandurbar In Maharashtra The first cases of bird flu have been registered in the world's second most populous country, India.
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Original:  The cases registered are reported from the Nandurbar Slaughter House in the western state of Maharashtra.
Revised:  The cases registered are reportedly from the Nandurbar Slaughter House in the western state of Maharashtra.
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Original:  Reportedly, 1500 birds have been reported as having Bird Flu . Maharashtra Animal Husbandary Minister Anees Ahmed confirmed that Bird Flu has been reported and said that effective steps will be taken with the help of eminent veteranians.
Revised:  Some 1500 birds have been reported as having Bird Flu . Maharashtra Animal Husbandary Minister Anees Ahmed confirmed that Bird Flu has been reported and said that effective steps will be taken with the help of eminent veteranians.
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Original:  Reportedly, 1500 birds have been reported as having Bird Flu . Maharashtra Animal Husbandary Minister Anees Ahmed confirmed that Bird Flu has been reported and said that effective steps will be taken with the help of eminent veteranians.
Revised:  Reportedly, 1500 birds have been reported as having the disease . Maharashtra Animal Husbandary Minister Anees Ahmed confirmed that Bird Flu has been reported and said that effective steps will be taken with the help of eminent veteranians.
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Original:  Reportedly, 1500 birds have been reported as having Bird Flu . Maharashtra Animal Husbandary Minister Anees Ahmed confirmed that Bird Flu has been reported and said that effective steps will be taken with the help of eminent veteranians.
Revised:  Reportedly, 1500 birds have been reported as having Bird Flu . Maharashtra Animal Husbandary Minister Anees Ahmed confirmed the reports and said that effective steps will be taken with the help of eminent veteranians.
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Original:  Ahmed also said a high-level meeting was under way in Mumbai to stock of the situation and to decide how to destroy the large flocks of birds in poultries in Nandurbar and Dhule districts.
Revised:  Ahmed also said a high-level meeting was under way in Mumbai to assess the situation and to decide how to destroy the large flocks of birds in poultries in Nandurbar and Dhule districts.
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Original:  Ahmed also said a high-level meeting was under way in Mumbai to stock of the situation and to decide how to destroy the large flocks of birds in poultries in Nandurbar and Dhule districts.
Revised:  Ahmed also said a high-level meeting was under way in Mumbai to stock of the situation and to decide how to cull the large flocks of birds in poultries in Nandurbar and Dhule districts.
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Original:  The minister also stated that state authorities had decided to destroy all 500,000 chickens in the farms in an area of roughly three kilometres around the farms where the infected birds were found.
Revised:  The minister also stated that state authorities had decided to cull all 500,000 chickens in the farms in an area of roughly three kilometres around the farms where the infected birds were found.
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Original: An explosion has been reported near the gate of the Philippine army's 104th Brigade headquarters, inside a kareokee bar on southern Jolo Island.
Revised: An explosion has been reported near the gate of the Philippine army's 104th Brigade headquarters, inside a karaoke bar on southern Jolo Island.
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Original: Lt. Col. Mark Zimmer, a military spokesman said that no American deaths have been reported.
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Original:  Security is a major concern for these excercises, mainly due to the presense of the Abu Sayyaf guerilla group, which is related to Al-Qaeda, and is stationed about 580 miles south of Manila  
Revised:  Security is a major concern for these excercises, mainly due to the presense of the Abu Sayyaf guerilla group, which is related to Al-Qaeda, and is stationed about 580 miles south of Manila . 
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Original: An explosion has been reported near the gate of the Philippine army's 104th Brigade headquarters, inside a karaoke bar on southern Jolo Island.
Revised: An explosion has been reported near the gate of the Philippine army's 104th Briigade headquarters, inside a karaoke bar on southern Jolo Island.
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Original: University academics in the Association of University Teachers (AUT) and Natfhe unions in Britain have voted in favour of strike action in protest against academic salaries.
Revised: University academics in the Association of University Teachers (AUT) and NATFHE unions in Britain have voted in favour of strike action in protest against academic salaries.
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Original: Members were given the options of voting for strike action and also for 'action short of a strike  . 64\% of those who voted in the AUT, and 70\% of the NATFHE members, voted for strike action.
Revised: Members were given the options of voting for strike action and also for 'action short of a strike ' . 64\% of those who voted in the AUT, and 70\% of the NATFHE members, voted for strike action.
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Original:  The police has not been able to interrogate the diplomats because of their dimplomatic immunity.
Revised:  The police has not been able to interrogate the diplomats because of their diplomatic immunity.
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Original: Several prominent Romaniann artists and celebrities will gather at the Radio Hall in :w: Bucharest on Sunday, January 23 to raise money for the victims of the catastrophic Indian Ocean tsunami of December 26, 2004.
Revised: Several prominent Romanian artists and celebrities will gather at the Radio Hall in :w: Bucharest on Sunday, January 23 to raise money for the victims of the catastrophic Indian Ocean tsunami of December 26, 2004.
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Original: Several prominent Romaniann artists and celebrities will gather at the Radio Hall in :w: Bucharest on Sunday, January 23 to raise money for the victims of the catastrophic Indian Ocean tsunami of December 26, 2004.
Revised: Several prominent Romaniann artists and celebrities will gather at the Radio Hall in Bucharest on Sunday, January 23 to raise money for the victims of the catastrophic Indian Ocean tsunami of December 26, 2004.
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Original:  Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims Bucharest to host its first ever CowPara 
Revised:  Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims Bucharest to host its first ever CowParade 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Related artices%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims Bucharest to host its first ever CowParade Category:Bucharest Category:Romania Category:Culture and entertainme
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Related artices%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Romanians raise 395,000 euro for tsunami victims Bucharest to host its first ever CowParade Category:Bucharest Category:Romania Category:Culture and entertainme
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Original:  France is the sixth country in the European Union to suffer this virus;
Revised:  France is the seventh country in the European Union to suffer this virus;
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Original:  Suspected cases of H5N1 in w:Croatia | Croatia and Denmark remain unconfirmed.
Revised:  Suspected cases of H5N1 in Croatia and Denmark remain unconfirmed.
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Original:  It also reiterated the Department of Defense's standing , saying "this behavior dishonors the sacrifices and core values of every service member representing the 50 nations of the coalition.
Revised:  It also reiterated the Department of Defense's stance , saying "this behavior dishonors the sacrifices and core values of every service member representing the 50 nations of the coalition.
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Original:  Panetta has called the videos "utterly deplorable" and not appropriate conduct for members of the United States armed forces  . Afghan president Hamid Karzai called for "the most severe punishment for anyone found guilty in this crime."
Revised:  Panetta has called the videos "utterly deplorable" and not appropriate conduct for United States armed forces . Afghan president Hamid Karzai called for "the most severe punishment for anyone found guilty in this crime."
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Original:  Panetta has called the videos "utterly deplorable" and not appropriate conduct for members of the United States armed forces  . Afghan president Hamid Karzai called for "the most severe punishment for anyone found guilty in this crime."
Revised:  Panetta has called the videos "utterly deplorable" and not appropriate conduct for members of the United States armed forces personnel . Afghan president Hamid Karzai called for "the most severe punishment for anyone found guilty in this crime."
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Original:  In it the men are heard saying "Have a great day, buddy" and "hope you like your golden shower".
Revised:  In it the men are heard saying "Have a great day, buddy" and "hope you like your shower".
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Original:   Any individuals with confirmed involvement will be held fully accountable."
Revised:  ... Any individuals with confirmed involvement will be held fully accountable."
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Original: A statement by said the men in uniform are probably not serving in Afghanistan anymore.
Revised: A statement by said the men in uniform probably aren't in Afghanistan anymore.
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Original:  It was leaked by and has since been posted on .
Revised:  It appeared on internet sites, including .
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Original:  The photographing or video taking of human causalities is specifically forbidden by the US military's code of conduct.
Revised:  The photographing or video taking of human casualties is specifically forbidden by the US military's code of conduct.
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Original: Yesterday February 17, 2006, WHO  officially declared presence of avian flu virus ( H5N1 strain ) in Egypt.
Revised: Yesterday February 17, 2006, the officially declared presence of avian flu virus ( H5N1 strain ) in Egypt.
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Original: Yesterday February 17, 2006, WHO  officially declared presence of avian flu virus ( H5N1 strain ) in Egypt.
Revised: Yesterday February 17, 2006, WHO officially declared presence of the H5N1 strain ) in Egypt.
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Original:  "There is avian flu now in Egypt," Hassan el Bushra, regional adviser for emerging diseases  the eastern Mediterranean regional office of  WHO said. that was in response to reporting presence of H5N1 virus in dead birds in three areas in Egypt , namely (Cairo, Giza, and Al-Minya ).
Revised:  "There is avian flu now in Egypt," Hassan el Bushra, regional adviser for emerging diseases at the eastern Mediterranean regional office of WHO said. that was in response to reporting presence of H5N1 virus in dead birds in three areas in Egypt , namely (Cairo, Giza, and Al-Minya ).
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Original:  "There is avian flu now in Egypt," Hassan el Bushra, regional adviser for emerging diseases  the eastern Mediterranean regional office of  WHO said. that was in response to reporting presence of H5N1 virus in dead birds in three areas in Egypt , namely (Cairo, Giza, and Al-Minya ).
Revised:  "There is avian flu now in Egypt," Hassan el Bushra, regional adviser for emerging diseases the eastern Mediterranean regional office of the WHO said. that was in response to reporting presence of H5N1 virus in dead birds in three areas in Egypt , namely (Cairo, Giza, and Al-Minya ).
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Original:  "There is avian flu now in Egypt," Hassan el Bushra, regional adviser for emerging diseases  the eastern Mediterranean regional office of  WHO said. that was in response to reporting presence of H5N1 virus in dead birds in three areas in Egypt , namely (Cairo, Giza, and Al-Minya ).
Revised:  "There is avian flu now in Egypt," Hassan el Bushra, regional adviser for emerging diseases the eastern Mediterranean regional office of WHO said. His response was to the reported presence of H5N1 virus in dead birds in three areas in Egypt , namely (Cairo, Giza, and Al-Minya ).
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Original:  "There is avian flu now in Egypt," Hassan el Bushra, regional adviser for emerging diseases  the eastern Mediterranean regional office of  WHO said. that was in response to reporting presence of H5N1 virus in dead birds in three areas in Egypt , namely (Cairo, Giza, and Al-Minya ).
Revised:  "There is avian flu now in Egypt," Hassan el Bushra, regional adviser for emerging diseases the eastern Mediterranean regional office of WHO said. that was in response to reporting presence of H5N1 virus in dead birds in three areas in Egypt - namely (Cairo, Giza, and Al-Minya ).
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Original:  A newly formed unit formed of veterinarians and preventive medicine specialists in Giza actively studying more than 70 reports of dead birds for exclusion of H5N1    
Revised:  A newly formed unit formed of veterinarians and preventive medicine specialists in Giza actively studying more than 70 reports of dead birds for exclusion of H5N1 . 
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Original: Yesterday February 17, 2006, the w: World Health Organisation |World Health Organisation officially declared presence of the H5N1 strain of theavian flu virus in Egypt.
Revised: Yesterday February 17, 2006, the World Health Organisation |World Health Organisation officially declared presence of the H5N1 strain of theavian flu virus in Egypt.
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Original: Yesterday February 17, 2006, the w: World Health Organisation |World Health Organisation officially declared presence of the H5N1 strain of theavian flu virus in Egypt.
Revised: Yesterday February 17, 2006, the w: World Health Organisation officially declared presence of the H5N1 strain of theavian flu virus in Egypt.
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