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Original:  Australia's  Govenor-General, Quentin Bryce  has cut Singapore and the UK from her official winter trip, leaving just France , due to expectations that her Prime Minister , Julia Gillard will arrive at Government House in the coming days to call an election.
Revised:  Australia's Govenor-General, Quentin Bryce has cut Singapore and the UK from her official winter trip, leaving just France , due to expectations that Prime Minister Julia Gillard will arrive at Government House in the coming days to call an election.
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Original:  This would be the second time in Australia's History that an election was held in Winter .
Revised:  This would be the second time in Australia's history that an election was held in Winter .
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Original:  This would be the second time in Australia's History that an election was held in Winter .
Revised:  This would be the second time in Australia's History that an election was held during the winter .
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Original:  As a result, Ms Bryce will head to Fromelles in France to represent Australia in a Dedication Ceremony and then home - bringing her 10 day trip down to 5 days.
Revised:  As a result, Ms Bryce will head to Fromelles in France to represent Australia in a dedication ceremony and then return home, bringing her 10 day trip down to 5 days.
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Original:  A Dormant Commission dictates that if a Governor-General is unavailible to call an election, The Govenor of New South Wales, Marie Bashir could acted as Administrator of The State in substitution.
Revised:  A Dormant Commission dictates that if a Governor-General is unavailable to call an election, The Govenor of New South Wales, Marie Bashir could acted as Administrator of The State in substitution.
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Original:  A Dormant Commission dictates that if a Governor-General is unavailible to call an election, The Govenor of New South Wales, Marie Bashir could acted as Administrator of The State in substitution.
Revised:  A Dormant Commission dictates that if a Governor-General is unavailible to call an election, the Govenor of New South Wales, Marie Bashir could acted as Administrator of The State in substitution.
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Original:  A Dormant Commission dictates that if a Governor-General is unavailible to call an election, The Govenor of New South Wales, Marie Bashir could acted as Administrator of The State in substitution.
Revised:  A Dormant Commission dictates that if a Governor-General is unavailible to call an election, The Govenor of New South Wales, Marie Bashir , could act as Administrator of The State in substitution.
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Original:  However in a speech today in Adelaide, South Australia, Gillard suggested that she wanted to achieve a mandate by the people through the usual means of the Govenor-General . "I will ask the Australian people for their trust to move forward  " Gillard said in the same speech.
Revised:  However in a speech today in Adelaide, South Australia, Gillard suggested that she wanted to achieve a mandate by the people through the usual means of the Governor-General . "I will ask the Australian people for their trust to move forward " Gillard said in the same speech.
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Original:  However in a speech today in Adelaide, South Australia, Gillard suggested that she wanted to achieve a mandate by the people through the usual means of the Govenor-General . "I will ask the Australian people for their trust to move forward  " Gillard said in the same speech.
Revised:  However in a speech today in Adelaide, South Australia, Gillard suggested that she wanted to achieve a mandate by the people through the usual means of the Govenor-General . "I will ask the Australian people for their trust to move forward , " Gillard said in the same speech.
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Original:  As it stands due to the Nielsen and Galaxy polls, on a two-party preferred basis, Julia Gillard leads her rival, Opposition Leader , Tony Abbott, 52-48 
Revised:  According to current Nielsen and Galaxy polls, on a two-party preferred basis, Julia Gillard leads her rival, Opposition Leader , Tony Abbott, 52-48 
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Original:  As it stands due to the Nielsen and Galaxy polls, on a two-party preferred basis, Julia Gillard leads her rival, Opposition Leader , Tony Abbott, 52-48 
Revised:  As it stands due to the Nielsen and Galaxy polls, on a two-party preferred basis, Julia Gillard leads her rival, Opposition Leader Tony Abbott, 52-48 
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Original:  As it stands due to the Nielsen and Galaxy polls, on a two-party preferred basis, Julia Gillard leads her rival, Opposition Leader , Tony Abbott, 52-48 
Revised:  As it stands due to the Nielsen and Galaxy polls, on a two-party preferred basis, Julia Gillard leads her rival, Opposition Leader , Tony Abbott, 52-48 percent
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Original: There has been much speculation as to when Julia Gillard , who achieved the position of Prime Minister through a special caucus vote and not through a federal election, was to request that the election be called by the Governor-General, with 21st and 28th of August being most likely.
Revised: There has been much speculation as to when Gillard was to request that the election be called by the Governor-General, with 21st and 28th of August being most likely.
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Original:  Australia's Govenor-General , Quentin Bryce, has cut Singapore and the UK from her official winter trip, keeping only France on her schedule, due to expectations that Prime Minister Julia Gillard will arrive at Government House in the coming days to  call an election.
Revised:  Australia's Govenor-General , Quentin Bryce, has cut Singapore and the UK from her official winter trip, keeping only France on her schedule, due to expectations that Prime Minister Julia Gillard will arrive at Government House in the coming days to request the Governor-General to call an election.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the Govenor-General said that "She wanted to be out of the country for as little time as possible [...] She was supposed to go Singapore and UK and now she's just going to France".
Revised:  A spokesperson for the Governor-General said that "She wanted to be out of the country for as little time as possible [...] She was supposed to go Singapore and UK and now she's just going to France".
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Original:  Australia's Governor-General of Australia , Quentin Bryce, has cut Singapore and the UK from her official winter trip, keeping only France on her schedule, due to expectations that Prime Minister Julia Gillard will arrive at Government House in the coming days to request the Governor-General to call an election.
Revised:  Australia's Governor-General , Quentin Bryce, has cut Singapore and the UK from her official winter trip, keeping only France on her schedule, due to expectations that Prime Minister Julia Gillard will arrive at Government House in the coming days to request the Governor-General to call an election.
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Original:  however, Suy warns that a new strain could appear  
Revised:  however, Suy warns that a new strain could appear . 
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Original:  This occurrence is part of a rise in H1N1 and Malaria during recent weeks in two provinces, as was the confirmation of 20 cases of Malaria in Zambales.
Revised:  This occurrence is part of a rise in H1N1 and malaria during recent weeks in two provinces, as was the confirmation of 20 cases of Malaria in Zambales.
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Original:  This occurrence is part of a rise in H1N1 and Malaria during recent weeks in two provinces, as was the confirmation of 20 cases of Malaria in Zambales.
Revised:  This occurrence is part of a rise in H1N1 and Malaria during recent weeks in two provinces, as was the confirmation of 20 cases of malaria in Zambales.
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Original:  This occurrence is part of a rise in  H1N1  and malaria during recent weeks in two provinces, as was the confirmation of 20 cases of malaria in Zambales.
Revised:  This occurrence is part of a rise in H1N1 ) and malaria during recent weeks in two provinces, as was the confirmation of 20 cases of malaria in Zambales.
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Original:  This occurrence is part of a rise in  H1N1  and malaria during recent weeks in two provinces, as was the confirmation of 20 cases of malaria in Zambales.
Revised:  This occurrence is part of a rise in H1N1 and malaria during recent weeks in two provinces, as was the confirmation of twenty cases of malaria in Zambales.
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Original:  Officials from the Department of Health say that they are not surprised, as  H1N1  cases began to appear at about the same time last year, coinciding with the onset of the local flu season.
Revised:  Officials from the Department of Health say that they are not surprised, as H1N1 ) cases began to appear at about the same time last year, coinciding with the onset of the local flu season.
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Original:  The Philippines reported their first case of A(H1N1) in May , 2009 in a 10-year-old child from the United States.
Revised:  The Philippines reported their first case of A(H1N1) in May 2009 in a 10-year-old child from the United States.
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Original:  The Philippines reported their first case of A(H1N1) in May , 2009 in a 10-year-old child from the United States.
Revised:  The Philippines reported their first case of A(H1N1) in May , 2009 in a ten-year-old child from the United States.
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Original:  According to the World Health Organization, 214 countries and territories have confirmed cases of  H1N1  , with a total of more than 18,311 deaths.
Revised:  According to the World Health Organization, 214 countries and territories have confirmed cases of H1N1 ) , with a total of more than 18,311 deaths.
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Original:  As of June , 2009, around 129 cases of A(H1N1) have been reported in the Philippines
Revised:  As of June 2009, around 129 cases of A(H1N1) have been reported in the Philippines
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Original:  As of June , 2009, around 129 cases of A(H1N1) have been reported in the Philippines
Revised:  As of June , 2009, around 129 cases have been reported in the Philippines
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Original: Location of Ilocos Sur. Six students in Ilocos Sur, Philippines tested positive for the H1N1 influenza virus.
Revised:  Six students in Ilocos Sur, Philippines tested positive for the H1N1 influenza virus.
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Original: blblkblknbkkfvkav kffv badikfbnadfnkjbdf bdf fkjbdfb fbjf d f kngd d kndf jkf oidjkf bnmd dff ju kfdnbjfdk nmdf df dff dff dfjdjkf df df df jfdjfdiufduiuibdfiudb fddfkjdfjffdbfdvnfkvkjfdbdfkjbf dfkbvfjkbfdkjjfhbf    
Revised: blblkblknbkkfvkav kffv badikfbnadfnkjbdf bdf fkjbdfb fbjf d f kngd d kndf jkf oidjkf bnmd dff ju kfdnbjfdk nmdf df dff dff dfjdjkf df df df jfdjfdiufduiuibdfiudb fddfkjdfjffdbfdvnfkvkjfdbdfkjbf dfkbvfjkbfdkjjfhbf Officials from the Department of Health say that they are not surprised, as A(H1N1) cases began to appear at about the same time last year, coinciding with the onset of the local flu season. Other health officials believe that the rise is due to the onset of the rainy season. The department noted that all prior cases in the Philippines have been "mild" and patients fully recovered. In the current case, five of those affected have recovered, while one still shows slight symptoms. 
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Original: blblkblknbkkfvkav kffv badikfbnadfnkjbdf bdf fkjbdfb fbjf d f kngd d kndf jkf oidjkf bnmd dff ju kfdnbjfdk nmdf df dff dff dfjdjkf df df df jfdjfdiufduiuibdfiudb fddfkjdfjffdbfdvnfkvkjfdbdfkjbf dfkbvfjkbfdkjjfhbf    
Revised: blblkblknbkkfvkav kffv badikfbnadfnkjbdf bdf fkjbdfb fbjf d f kngd d kndf jkf oidjkf bnmd dff ju kfdnbjfdk nmdf df dff dff dfjdjkf df df df jfdjfdiufduiuibdfiudb fddfkjdfjffdbfdvnfkvkjfdbdfkjbf dfkbvfjkbfdkjjfhbf "If we look at the pattern for this month, it was also the same time last year when cases of A(H1N1) started increasing," says Dr. Lyndon Lee Suy, "As it is, it is flu season already." The Department of Health believes that the appearance of the virus should not cause distress; however, Suy warns that a new strain could appear. 
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Original: blblkblknbkkfvkav kffv badikfbnadfnkjbdf bdf fkjbdfb fbjf d f kngd d kndf jkf oidjkf bnmd dff ju kfdnbjfdk nmdf df dff dff dfjdjkf df df df jfdjfdiufduiuibdfiudb fddfkjdfjffdbfdvnfkvkjfdbdfkjbf dfkbvfjkbfdkjjfhbf    
Revised: blblkblknbkkfvkav kffv badikfbnadfnkjbdf bdf fkjbdfb fbjf d f kngd d kndf jkf oidjkf bnmd dff ju kfdnbjfdk nmdf df dff dff dfjdjkf df df df jfdjfdiufduiuibdfiudb fddfkjdfjffdbfdvnfkvkjfdbdfkjbf dfkbvfjkbfdkjjfhbf The Philippines reported their first case of A(H1N1) in May 2009 in a ten-year-old child from the United States. According to the World Health Organization, 214 countries and territories have confirmed cases of A(H1N1), with a total of more than 18,311 deaths. As of June 2009, around 129 cases have been reported in the Philippines
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Original: According to the ARM, most of the injuries and deaths were attributed homemade bombs — otherwise known as improvised explosive devices (IED's) .
Revised: According to the ARM, most of the injuries and deaths were attributed homemade bombs — otherwise known as improvised explosive devices .
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Original: File:100207-X-XXXXX-4.jpg|350px|NATO soldiers prepare to launch major assaults on Taliban strongholds in Helmand Province in order to increase security in the area.
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Original: A new containment cap has been installed on a leaking well in an effort by the BP energy company to contain oil spewing into the Gulf of Mexico.
Revised: A new sealing cap has been installed on a leaking well in an effort by the BP energy company to contain oil spewing into the Gulf of Mexico.
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Original:  The previous  cap, which was removed Saturday, had a much looser fit than the new one and allowed oil to escape into the Gulf.
Revised:  The previous containment cap, which was removed Saturday, had a much looser fit than the new one and allowed oil to escape into the Gulf.
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Original:  The energy company  planned begin running tests Tuesday  , although these have been delayed for further observation of the well, to measure the performance of the new well cap under pressure.
Revised:  The energy company had planned begin running tests Tuesday , although these have been delayed for further observation of the well, to measure the performance of the new well cap under pressure.
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Original:  The energy company  planned begin running tests Tuesday  , although these have been delayed for further observation of the well, to measure the performance of the new well cap under pressure.
Revised:  The energy company planned begin running tests Tuesday to measure the performance of the new well cap under pressure , although these have been delayed for further observation of the well, to measure the performance of the new well cap under pressure.
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Original:  Doug Suttles, a BP executive, explained that during the test, all valves on the new cap will be shut and for the first time, oil should cease to leak  since the spill began earlier this year.
Revised:  Doug Suttles, a BP executive, explained that during the test, all valves on the new cap will be shut and oil should cease to leak since the spill began earlier this year.
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Original:  Doug Suttles, a BP executive, explained that during the test, all valves on the new cap will be shut and for the first time, oil should cease to leak  since the spill began earlier this year.
Revised:  Doug Suttles, a BP executive, explained that during the test, all valves on the new cap will be shut and for the first time, oil should cease to leak , for the first time since the spill began earlier this year.
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Original:   Even if the  tests do succeed and the well may remain shut, work on the two relief wells will continue until both intercept the main well.
Revised:  Even if the tests do succeed and the main well is shut, work on the two relief wells will continue until both intercept the main well.
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Original:   Even if the  tests do succeed and the well may remain shut, work on the two relief wells will continue until both intercept the main well.
Revised:  Even if the tests do succeed and the well may remain shut, work on the two relief wells will continue until it intercepts the main well.
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Original:  In this case, containment operations would continue until the relief wells are finished by the end of this month or into next .
Revised:  Containment operations will continue even the relief wells are finished by the end of this month or into next .
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Original: The energy company had planned begin running  tests Tuesday to measure the performance of the new well cap under pressure, although these  have been delayed for further analysis.
Revised: The energy company had planned begin running tests Tuesday to measure the performance of the well under pressure, although these have been delayed for further analysis.
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Original: The energy company had planned begin running  tests Tuesday to measure the performance of the new well cap under pressure, although these  have been delayed for further analysis.
Revised: The energy company had planned begin running tests Tuesday to measure the performance of the new well cap under pressure, although these tests have been delayed for further analysis.
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Original:  Doug Suttles, a BP executive, explained that during the test, all valves on the new cap will be shut and oil should cease to leak, for the first time since the spill began earlier this year.
Revised:  Doug Suttles, a BP executive, explained that during the test, the valves on the new cap will be shut and oil should cease to leak, for the first time since the spill began earlier this year.
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Original: The energy company had planned begin running integrity tests Tuesday to measure the performance of the well under pressure , although these tests have been delayed for further analysis  .
Revised: The energy company had planned begin running integrity tests Tuesday to measure the performance of the well under pressure . The tests were delayed a day for further analysis .
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Original:  If the tests show that the well is strong enough, the sealing cap  will be closed, shutting in the oil flow.
Revised:  If the tests show that the well is strong enough, the sealing cap valves will be closed, shutting in the oil flow.
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Original:  If this were to happen, keeping the cap shut would continue to damage the well further .
Revised:  If this were to happen, keeping the cap shut could further damage the well further .
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Original:  If this were to happen, keeping the cap shut would continue to damage the well further .
Revised:  If this were to happen, keeping the cap shut would continue to damage the well .
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Original:  Containment  operations will continue even  the relief wells are finished to deal with oil already released.
Revised:  Containment operations will continue even after the relief wells are finished to deal with oil already released.
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Original:  The cap installation is one of the steps of a procedure that could take several more days with the goal of ending the Deepwater Horizon oil spill that began on April 20 when the Deepwater Horizon oil rig exploded, killing eleven and marking the beginning of the worst offshore oil spill in United States history
Revised:  The Deepwater Horizon oil spill that began on April 20 when the Deepwater Horizon oil rig exploded, killing eleven and marking the beginning of the worst offshore oil spill in United States history
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Original:  The cap installation is one of the steps of a procedure that could take several more days with the goal of ending the Deepwater Horizon oil spill that began on April 20 when the Deepwater Horizon oil rig exploded, killing eleven and marking the beginning of the worst offshore oil spill in United States history
Revised:  The cap installation is one of the steps of a procedure that could take several more days with the goal of ending the Deepwater Horizon oil spill began on April 20 when the Deepwater Horizon oil rig exploded, killing eleven and marking the beginning of the worst offshore oil spill in United States history
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Original:  The cap installation is one of the steps of a procedure that could take several more days with the goal of ending the Deepwater Horizon oil spill that began on April 20 when the Deepwater Horizon oil rig exploded, killing eleven and marking the beginning of the worst offshore oil spill in United States history
Revised:  The cap installation is one of the steps of a procedure that could take several more days with the goal of ending the Deepwater Horizon oil spill that began on April 20 when the Deepwater Horizon oil rig exploded, killing eleven and marking the start of the worst offshore oil spill in United States history
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Original: A new sealing cap has been installed on a leaking well in an effort by the BP energy company to contain oil spewing into the Gulf of Mexico.
Revised: A new sealing cap . The cap was installed on a leaking well in an effort by the BP energy company to contain oil spewing into the Gulf of Mexico.
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Original:  If the tests show that the well is strong enough, the sealing cap valves will be closed, shutting in the oil flow .
Revised:  If the tests show that the well is strong enough, the sealing cap valves will likely remain be closed .
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Original:  The Deepwater Horizon oil spill began on April 20 when the Deepwater Horizon oil rig exploded, killing eleven and marking the beginning of the worst offshore oil spill in United States history
Revised:  The Deepwater Horizon oil spill began on April 20 when the Deepwater Horizon oil rig exploded, killing eleven and marking the start of the worst offshore oil spill in United States history
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Original:  BP senior vice president Kent Wells explained at his Wednesday morning briefing that the first relief well is now 4 feet from the original well and there is a remote possibility that the pressure test could open a path to the relief well.
Revised:  Kent Wells explained at his Wednesday morning briefing that the first relief well is now 4 feet from the original well and there is a remote possibility that the pressure test could open a path to the relief well.
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Original: For the first time since April 20, no oil was flowing into the Gulf of Mexico, though the halt may be temporary, as integrity testing began on a new sealing cap.
Revised: For the first time since April 20, no oil is flowing into the Gulf of Mexico, though the halt may be temporary, as integrity testing began on a new sealing cap.
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Original:  As owner of the Yankees, he led the team to 11 American League pennants and 7 World Series titles.
Revised:  As owner of the Yankees, he led the team to eleven American League pennants and 7 World Series titles.
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Original:  As owner of the Yankees, he led the team to 11 American League pennants and 7 World Series titles.
Revised:  As owner of the Yankees, he led the team to 11 American League pennants and seven World Series titles.
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Original:  As "The Boss," Steinbrenner pursued free agents with great fervor, signing Reggie Jackson to a five year, US$3.5 million deal after the 1976 season.
Revised:  Nicknamed "The Boss," Steinbrenner pursued free agents with great fervor, signing Reggie Jackson to a five year, US$3.5 million deal after the 1976 season.
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