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Original:  In a speech commemorating the 65th anniversary of the Koreans’ liberation from Japanese rule, Lee stated he “ believe[s] that the time has come to start discussing realistic policies to prepare for that day [of reunification] such as a reunification tax. ” The tax would fund the absorption of the North Korean economy—which is less than 3\% the size of the South Korean economy—and could cost up to $1 trillion, according to New York Times sources.
Revised:  In a speech commemorating the 65th anniversary of the Koreans’ liberation from Japanese rule, Lee stated he “ believe[s] that the time has come to start discussing realistic policies to prepare for that day [of reunification] such as a reunification tax. ” The tax would fund the absorption of the North Korean economy—which is less than three percent of the size of the South Korean economy—and could cost up to $1 trillion, according to New York Times sources.
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Original:  However, “ North Korea will take a unification tax as the expression of a South Korean attempt to prepare for a sudden collapse of the North Korean government, ” according to Kim Yong-hyun, an analyst at Dongguk University in Seoul.
Revised:  However, " North Korea will take a unification tax as the expression of a South Korean attempt to prepare for a sudden collapse of the North Korean government, ” according to Kim Yong-hyun, an analyst at Dongguk University in Seoul.
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Original:  However, “ North Korea will take a unification tax as the expression of a South Korean attempt to prepare for a sudden collapse of the North Korean government, ” according to Kim Yong-hyun, an analyst at Dongguk University in Seoul.
Revised:  However, “ North Korea will take a unification tax as the expression of a South Korean attempt to prepare for a sudden collapse of the North Korean government, " according to Kim Yong-hyun, an analyst at Dongguk University in Seoul.
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Original: Robert Wilson (middle) with his brothers in 1979 Robert Wilson , the bassist for funk group The Gap Band has died at the age of 53.
Revised: Robert Wilson Robert Wilson , the bassist for funk group The Gap Band has died at the age of 53.
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Original: Robert Wilson (middle) with his brothers in 1979 Robert Wilson , the bassist for funk group The Gap Band has died at the age of 53.
Revised: Robert Wilson (middle) with his brothers in 1979 , the bassist for funk group The Gap Band has died at the age of 53.
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Original:  But Japan's per capita GDP still is ten times bigger than the Chinese 's one .
Revised:  However Japan's per capita GDP still is ten times bigger than the Chinese 's one .
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Original: China's economy surpassed Japan  during the second quarter of 2010, and now is the second largest world economic power.
Revised: China's economy surpassed Japan 's during the second quarter of 2010, and now is the second largest world economic power.
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Original: From April to June of this year, China's Gross Domestic Product (GDP) April to June was USD 1.337 trillion, bigger than the Japanese GDP at USD 1.288 trillion.
Revised: From April to June of this year, China's Gross Domestic Product (GDP) was USD 1.337 trillion, bigger than the Japanese GDP at USD 1.288 trillion.
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Original:  But Japan's GDP still remains bigger than the Chinese one in the first half of 2010.
Revised:  But Japan's GDP still remains larger than the Chinese one in the first half of 2010.
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Original:  The race result left Harvick leading the Driver's Championship with 3,400 points , and gave him a position in the Chase for the Sprint Cup.
Revised:  The race result left Harvick leading the Driver's Championship with 3,400 pointers , and gave him a position in the Chase for the Sprint Cup.
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Original:  NASCAR Sprint Cup Series driver Kevin Harvick won his third race of the season after leading sixty laps on Sunday during the 2010 Carfax 400 race at Michigan International Speedway in Brooklyn , Michigan.
Revised:  NASCAR Sprint Cup Series driver Kevin Harvick won his third race of the season after leading sixty laps on Sunday during the race at in , Michigan.
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Original:  The race result left Harvick leading the Driver's Championship with 3,400 points, and gave him a position in the Chase for the Sprint Cup .
Revised:  The race result left Harvick leading the Driver's Championship with 3,400 points, and gave him a position in the .
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Original:  His previous victory came during the 2010 Coke Zero 400.
Revised:  His previous victory came during the .
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Original:  Denny Hamlin finished in the second position, ahead of Carl Edwards and Greg Biffle in third and fourth, respectively.
Revised:  finished in the second position, ahead of Carl Edwards and Greg Biffle in third and fourth, respectively.
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Original:  Denny Hamlin finished in the second position, ahead of Carl Edwards and Greg Biffle in third and fourth, respectively.
Revised:  Denny Hamlin finished in the second position, ahead of and in third and fourth, respectively.
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Original:  Matt Kenseth, Tony Stewart, Juan Pablo Montoya, Martin Truex, Jr., Elliott Sadler, and Joey Logano rounded out the top ten positions.
Revised:  Matt Kenseth, , , , , and rounded out the top ten positions.
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Original:  In the point standings , Harvick and Gordon remained in the first and second position, and Hamlin moved into the third position as Stewart moved to fourth.
Revised:  In the , Harvick and Gordon remained in the first and second position, and Hamlin moved into the third position as Stewart moved to fourth.
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Original:  Jimmie Johnson , Edwards, Jeff Burton, and Kyle Busch followed in the top eight points positions.
Revised:  , Edwards, Jeff Burton, and Kyle Busch followed in the top eight points positions.
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Original:  Jimmie Johnson , Edwards, Jeff Burton, and Kyle Busch followed in the top eight points positions.
Revised:  Jimmie Johnson , Edwards, , and followed in the top eight points positions.
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Original:  Kenseth moved into to the ninth position, as Kurrt Busch fell to tenth.
Revised:  Kenseth moved into to the ninth position, as fell to tenth.
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Original:  Biffle and Clint Bowyer rounded out the top twelve, and are currently in the Chase .
Revised:  Biffle and rounded out the top twelve, and are currently in the Chase .
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Original:  Biffle and Clint Bowyer rounded out the top twelve, and are currently in the Chase .
Revised:  Biffle and Clint Bowyer rounded out the top twelve, and are currently in the .
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Original:  Official Top-10 Race Results for the 2010 Carfax 400 Position Car Number Driver 1 29 Kevin Harvick 2 11 Denny Hamlin 3 99 Carl Edwards 4 16 Greg Biffle 5 17 Matt Kenseth 6 14 Tony Stewart 7 42 Juan Pablo Montoya 8 56 Martin Truex, Jr. 9 19 Elliott Sadler 10 20 Joey Logan
Revised:  Official Top-10 Race Results for the Position Car Number Driver 1 29 Kevin Harvick 2 11 Denny Hamlin 3 99 Carl Edwards 4 16 Greg Biffle 5 17 Matt Kenseth 6 14 Tony Stewart 7 42 Juan Pablo Montoya 8 56 Martin Truex, Jr. 9 19 Elliott Sadler 10 20 Joey Logan
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Original:  Official Top-10 Race Results for the 2010 Carfax 400 Position Car Number Driver 1 29 Kevin Harvick 2 11 Denny Hamlin 3 99 Carl Edwards 4 16 Greg Biffle 5 17 Matt Kenseth 6 14 Tony Stewart 7 42 Juan Pablo Montoya 8 56 Martin Truex, Jr. 9 19 Elliott Sadler 10 20 Joey Logan
Revised:  Official Top-10 Race Results for the 2010 Carfax 400 Position Car Number Driver 1 29 Kevin Harvick 2 11 Denny Hamlin 3 99 Carl Edwards 4 16 Greg Biffle 5 17 Matt Kenseth 6 14 Tony Stewart 7 42 Juan Pablo Montoya 8 56 Martin Truex, Jr. 9 19 Elliott Sadler 10 20 Joey Logano Sister link
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Original:  Up-and-coming bands rock bands , Fall Out Boy and The Killers , also each won an award .
Revised:  Up-and-coming rock bands Fall Out Boy and The Killers , also each won an award .
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Original:  Up-and-coming bands rock bands , Fall Out Boy and The Killers , also each won an award .
Revised:  Up-and-coming bands rock bands , Fall Out Boy and The Killers also won awards .
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Original:  The event was hosted by Sean " Diddy " Combs at the American Airlines Arena in Miami, Florida, USA ;
Revised:  The event was hosted by Sean " Diddy " Combs at the American Airlines Arena in Miami, Florida, USA ,
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Original:  The awards were for their single Boulevard of Broken Dreams off of their American Idiot album.
Revised:  The awards were for their single Boulevard of Broken Dreams off of the American Idiot album.
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Original: Green Day arrived at the event in there rusted green convertible from the Holiday and Boulevard of Broken Dreams music videos.
Revised: Green Day arrived at the event in their rusted green convertible from the Holiday and Boulevard of Broken Dreams music videos.
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Original:  Kelly remains a chart-topper even though the star is awaiting trial for child pornography charges  
Revised:  Kelly remains a chart-topper even though the star is awaiting trial for child pornography charges . 
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Original:   Mother confesses to suffocating her two children An unemployed, single mother from South Carolina has confessed to suffocating her two toddler children with her bare hands.
Revised:  Location of South Carolina. Mother confesses to suffocating her two children An unemployed, single mother from South Carolina has confessed to suffocating her two toddler children with her bare hands.
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Original: Map of USA highlighting South Carolina.png Location of South Carolina.
Revised:  Location of South Carolina.
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Original:  Shaquan Duley faces two murder charges and is scheduled to appear in court on Wednesday.
Revised:  She faces two murder charges and is scheduled to appear in court on Wednesday.
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Original:  Shaquan Duley had apparently argued with her mother the night before the murder.
Revised:  Duley had apparently argued with her mother the night before the murder.
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Original:  Orangeburg County Sheriff Larry Williams has stated that "we believe this is a direct response ( to the argument ) from Ms. Duley.
Revised:  Orangeburg County Sheriff Larry Williams has stated that "we believe this is a direct response to the argument ) from Ms. Duley.
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Original:  Orangeburg County Sheriff Larry Williams has stated that "we believe this is a direct response ( to the argument ) from Ms. Duley.
Revised:  Orangeburg County Sheriff Larry Williams has stated that "we believe this is a direct response ( to the argument from Ms. Duley.
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Original: Dr. Ryan, a celebrity in himself worked on several stars including Janice Dickinson, Gene Simmons, Shauna Sand and Adrianne Curry.
Revised: Dr. Ryan, a celebrity in his own right worked on several stars including Janice Dickinson, Gene Simmons, Shauna Sand and Adrianne Curry.
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Original: Dr. Ryan, a celebrity in his own right worked on several stars including Janice Dickinson, Gene Simmons, Shauna Sand and Adrianne Curry.
Revised: Dr. Ryan, a celebrity in his own right , performed plastic surgery on several stars including Janice Dickinson, Gene Simmons, Shauna Sand and Adrianne Curry.
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Original:  Ryan was traveling with his pet dog at the time of the crash, the dog was found seriously injured in  ocean and was transported to a local veterinarian.
Revised:  Ryan was traveling with his pet dog at the time of the crash, the dog was found seriously injured in the ocean and was transported to a local veterinarian.
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Original:  It is reported that the Jeep Ryan was driving crashed over the side of the Pacific Coast highway and landed  rocks.
Revised:  It is reported that the Jeep Ryan was driving crashed over the side of the Pacific Coast highway and landed on rocks.
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Original:  Ryan was traveling with his pet dog at the time of the crash , the dog was found seriously injured in the ocean and was transported to a local veterinarian.
Revised:  Ryan was traveling with his pet dog at the time of the crash ; the dog was found seriously injured in the ocean and was transported to a local veterinarian.
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Original:  He appeared on several television shows and became one of the first people on perform plastic surgery on television in 1995.
Revised:  He appeared on several television shows and became one of the first people to perform plastic surgery on television in 1995.
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Original:  It is reported that the Jeep Ryan was driving crashed over the side of the Pacific Coast highway and landed on rocks.
Revised:  It is reported that the Jeep Ryan was driving crashed over the side of the Pacific Coast Highway and landed on rocks.
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Original:  Plastic surgeon to the stars Dr. Frank Ryan has died in a car accident at age 50.
Revised: Dr. Frank Ryan Plastic surgeon to the stars Dr. Frank Ryan has died in a car accident at age 50.
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Original: Dr. Frank Ryan Plastic surgeon to the stars Dr. Frank Ryan has died in a car accident at age 50.
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Original: Dr. Frank Ryan Plastic surgeon to the stars Dr. Frank Ryan has died in a car accident at age 50.
Revised: Dr. Frank Ryan Plastic surgeon to the stars has died in a car accident at age 50.
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Original:  It is reported that the Jeep Ryan was driving crashed over the side of the Pacific Coast Highway and landed on rocks.
Revised:  It is reported that the Jeep Ryan was driving crashed over the side of the and landed on rocks.
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Original:  Dr. Ryan, a celebrity in his own right, performed plastic surgery on several stars including Janice Dickinson, Gene Simmons, Shauna Sand and Adrianne Curry .
Revised:  Dr. Ryan, a celebrity in his own right, performed plastic surgery on several stars including , , and .
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Original: Scottish based game-developer Realtime Worlds entered Administration today following low sales of their online shooter game, All-Points Bulletin (APB).
Revised: Scottish based game-developer Realtime Worlds entered administration today following low sales of their online shooter game, All-Points Bulletin (APB).
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Original:  Apparently between 60 and 170 jobs will be lost, and a total closure of their American office has been announced.
Revised:  Between 60 and 170 jobs will be lost, and a total closure of their American office has been announced.
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Original:  APB will stay online to gamers who have already purchased the game  [  
Revised:  APB will stay online to gamers who have already purchased the game [t 
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Original: REDIRECT Dozens dead after bus accident in Philippines At least thirty five people are dead while six seriously injured in northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine, reports say.
Revised:  At least thirty five people are dead while six seriously injured in northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine, reports say.
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Original: At least thirty five people are dead while six  seriously injured in  northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine , reports say .
Revised: According to reports, at least thirty five people are dead while six seriously injured in northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine , reports say .
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Original: At least thirty five people are dead while six  seriously injured in  northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine , reports say .
Revised: At least thirty five people are dead while six are seriously injured in northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine , reports say .
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Original: At least thirty five people are dead while six  seriously injured in  northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine , reports say .
Revised: At least thirty five people are dead while six seriously injured in the northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine , reports say .
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Original: At least thirty five people are dead while six  seriously injured in  northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine , reports say .
Revised: At least thirty five people are dead while six seriously injured in northern Philippines after a bus plunged into a 100 meter deep ravine .
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Original:  The accident happened on Wednesday early in the morning near the city of Baguio, 200 kilometres north of the capital Manila.
Revised:  The accident occurred early Wednesday near the city of Baguio, 200 kilometres north of the capital Manila.
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Original:  The accident happened when the bus braiks failed and rolled down a hill into a ditch.
Revised:  The accident happened when the brakes on the vehicle failed and rolled down a hill into a ditch.
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Original:  There were total  47 passengers on board.
Revised:  There were total of 47 passengers on board.
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Original:  The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, said  " He survived by jumping out of the door before the vehicle plunged into the ravine.
Revised:  The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, said that " He survived by jumping out of the door before the vehicle plunged into the ravine.
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Original:  The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, said  " He survived by jumping out of the door before the vehicle plunged into the ravine.
Revised:  The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, said " he survived by jumping out of the door before the vehicle plunged into the ravine.
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Original: The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, said that "he survived by jumping out of the door before the vehicle plunged into the ravine .
Revised: The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, said that "he survived by jumping out the door before the vehicle plunged into the ravine .
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Original: The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, said that "he survived by jumping out of the door before the vehicle plunged into the ravine .
Revised: The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, said that "he survived by jumping out of the door before the bus fell into the ravine .
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Original:  The accident happened when the brakes on the vehicle failed and  rolled down a hill into a ditch.
Revised:  The accident happened when the brakes on the vehicle failed and it rolled down a hill into a ditch.
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Original:  There was  total of 47 passengers on board.
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Original:  The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, who survived the accident with only minor injuries by jumping out the door before the bus fell into the ravine , said that "the driver tried to ram the bus into a mango tree to prevent it from falling, but failed.
Revised:  The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, survived the accident with only minor injuries by jumping out the door before the bus fell into the ravine , said that "the driver tried to ram the bus into a mango tree to prevent it from falling, but failed.
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Original:  The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, who survived the accident with only minor injuries by jumping out the door before the bus fell into the ravine , said that "the driver tried to ram the bus into a mango tree to prevent it from falling, but failed.
Revised:  The bus conductor, John Patrick Flores, who survived the accident with only minor injuries by jumping out the door before the bus fell into the ravine . He said that "the driver tried to ram the bus into a mango tree to prevent it from falling, but failed.
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Original:  Taylor faces eleven counts from international crimes including rape, sexual slavery, enlistment of children under the age of fifteen, and pillaging.
Revised:  Taylor faces eleven counts for international crimes including rape, sexual slavery, enlistment of children under the age of fifteen, and pillaging.
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Original: The board of the Mandela charity said in a statment , "Mr. Ractliffe regrets his omission to inform the chairperson, chief executive officer and the rest of the board of trustees of the NMCF of his receipt of the uncut diamonds until now...
Revised: The board of the Mandela charity said in a statement , "Mr. Ractliffe regrets his omission to inform the chairperson, chief executive officer and the rest of the board of trustees of the NMCF of his receipt of the uncut diamonds until now...
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Original: Ractcliffe took the diamonds from Campbell, fearing she might be prosecuted for removing uncut diamonds from South Africa, illegal without a license.
Revised: Ractliffe took the diamonds from Campbell, fearing she might be prosecuted for removing uncut diamonds from South Africa, illegal without a license.
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Original:  Ractclife said, "Naomi suggested they could be of some benefit to the Nelson Mandela Children's Fund — but I told her I would not involve the NMCF in anything that could possibly be illegal...
Revised:  Ractcliffe said, "Naomi suggested they could be of some benefit to the Nelson Mandela Children's Fund — but I told her I would not involve the NMCF in anything that could possibly be illegal...
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Original: Western Australian district court judge, Shauna Deane has found that an islamic woman must remove her burqa in order to testify in regards to an islamic school's alleged receiving of state and federal government funding in a fraudulent manner.
Revised: Western Australian district court judge, Shauna Deane has found that an islamic woman must remove her burqa in order to testify with regard to an Islamic school's alleged receiving of state and federal government funding in a fraudulent manner.
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Original:  The woman only identified as 'Tasneem', was deemed unable to wear her traditional coverings despite feeling uncomfortable to do so in public.
Revised:  The woman , identified only as 'Tasneem', was deemed unable to wear her traditional coverings despite feeling uncomfortable to do so in public.
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Original:  The woman only identified as 'Tasneem', was deemed unable to wear her traditional coverings despite feeling uncomfortable to do so in public.
Revised:  The woman only identified as 'Tasneem', was deemed unable to wear her traditional coverings despite feeling uncomfortable removing them in public.
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Original:  Judge Shauna Deane found that it would not be suitable for 'Tasneem' to offer evidence with her face covered, stating that the need to maintain a fair trial is consistant with allowing the jury to interpret and view the face of a wittness .
Revised:  Judge Shauna Deane found that it would not be suitable for 'Tasneem' to offer evidence with her face covered, stating that the need to maintain a fair trial is consistent with allowing the jury to interpret and view the face of a wittness .
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Original:  Judge Shauna Deane found that it would not be suitable for 'Tasneem' to offer evidence with her face covered, stating that the need to maintain a fair trial is consistant with allowing the jury to interpret and view the face of a wittness .
Revised:  Judge Shauna Deane found that it would not be suitable for 'Tasneem' to offer evidence with her face covered, stating that the need to maintain a fair trial is consistant with allowing the jury to view and interpret cues from the face of a wittness .
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