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Original:  Obama has set toughter emission targets in a White House speech.
Revised: Barack Obama has set toughter emission targets in a White House speech.
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Original:  These targets are to be offered for the Copenhagen international climate meeting next month  .
Revised:  Obama will attend the Copenhagen international climate meeting next month .
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Original:  Obama 's pledge also contains interim targets for the US: a 30 per cent cut below 2005 levels by 2025 and a 42 per cent cut by 2030.
Revised:  Obama has also set interim targets for the US: a 30 per cent cut below 2005 levels by 2025 and a 42 per cent cut by 2030.
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Original:  Obama 's pledge also contains interim targets for the US: a 30 per cent cut below 2005 levels by 2025 and a 42 per cent cut by 2030.
Revised:  Obama 's pledge also contains interim targets for the US: a 30 \% cut by 2025 and a 42 per cent cut by 2030.
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Original:  Obama 's pledge also contains interim targets for the US: a 30 per cent cut below 2005 levels by 2025 and a 42 per cent cut by 2030.
Revised:  Obama 's pledge also contains interim targets for the US: a 30 per cent cut below 2005 levels by 2025 and a 42 \% cut by 2030.
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Original:   To compare, the European Union is aiming to cut its emissions by 20 per cent cut by 2020 and 80 per cent by 2050.
Revised:  To compare, the European Union speaks about cutting its emissions by 20 per cent cut by 2020 and 80 per cent by 2050.
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Original:   To compare, the European Union is aiming to cut its emissions by 20 per cent cut by 2020 and 80 per cent by 2050.
Revised:  To compare, the European Union is aiming to cut its emissions by 20 \% cut by 2020 and 80 per cent by 2050.
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Original:   To compare, the European Union is aiming to cut its emissions by 20 per cent cut by 2020 and 80 per cent by 2050.
Revised:  To compare, the European Union is aiming to cut its emissions by 20 per cent cut by 2020 and 80 \% by 2050.
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Original: Barack Obama has set toughter emission targets in a White House speech.
Revised: Barack Obama has set tougher emission targets in a White House speech.
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Original:  Barack Obama has set tougher emission targets in a White House speech.
Revised: left Barack Obama has set tougher emission targets in a White House speech.
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Original: left Barack Obama has set tougher emission targets in a White House speech.
Revised: File:Official portrait of Barack Obama.jpg|Official presidential portrait of Barack Obama, taken shortly before he assumed office. Barack Obama has set tougher emission targets in a White House speech.
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Original: , , . Canada has won the at the in , defeating Germany 54-50 in the gold medal match this afternoon.
Revised: , , — Canada has won the at the in , defeating Germany 54-50 in the gold medal match this afternoon.
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Original: , , — Canada has won the at the  in , defeating Germany 54-50 in the gold medal match this afternoon.
Revised: , , — Canada has won the at the in the gold medal match this afternoon.
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Original:  The Game was a close one, which was decided in an exciting finish involving a series of missed shots and turnovers by both sides.
Revised:  The game was a close one, which was decided in an exciting finish involving a series of missed shots and turnovers by both sides.
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Original:  The Netherlands won the bronze medal game, defeating the United States 74-58.
Revised:  The won the bronze medal game, defeating the United States 74-58.
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Original:  The Netherlands won the bronze medal game, defeating the United States 74-58.
Revised:  The Netherlands won the bronze medal game, defeating the 74–58.
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Original:  The score belied the closeness of the Game .
Revised:  The score belied the closeness of the game .
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Original:  In her closing remarks, , the President of the International Wheelchair Basketball Federation (IWBF), said that the completion webcast had been watched by 68,000 people in 68 countries
Revised:  In her closing remarks, , the President of the International Wheelchair Basketball Federation (IWBF), said the completion webcast had been watched by 68,000 people in 68 countries
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Original: The head of the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA)  said earlier today that the organization has reached a "dead end" in a probe into Iran's nuclear program.
Revised: Head of the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) said earlier today that the organization has reached a "dead end" in a probe into Iran's nuclear program.
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Original:  In remarks to the International Atomic Energy Agency's board, IAEA chief Mohamed ElBaradei expressed frustration over Iran's failure to cooperate with the Vienna-based agency.
Revised:  In remarks to the International Atomic Energy Agency's board, IAEA chief ElBaradei expressed frustration over Iran's failure to cooperate with the Vienna-based agency.
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Original: Head of the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) , Mohamed ElBaradei, said earlier on Thursday that the organization has reached a "dead end" in a probe into Iran's nuclear program.
Revised: The head of the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) , Mohamed ElBaradei, said earlier on Thursday that the organization has reached a "dead end" in a probe into Iran's nuclear program.
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Original: Head of the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) , Mohamed ElBaradei, said earlier on Thursday that the organization has reached a "dead end" in a probe into Iran's nuclear program.
Revised: Head of the International Atomic Energy Agency , Mohamed ElBaradei, said earlier on Thursday that the organization has reached a "dead end" in a probe into Iran's nuclear program.
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Original:  File photo of ElBaradei In remarks to the International Atomic Energy Agency's board, IAEA chief ElBaradei expressed frustration over Iran's failure to cooperate with the Vienna-based agency.
Revised:  File photo of ElBaradei In remarks to the International Atomic Energy Agency's board, ElBaradei expressed frustration over Iran's failure to cooperate with the Vienna-based agency.
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Original: File photo of ElBaradei In remarks to the International Atomic Energy Agency 's board, ElBaradei expressed frustration over Iran's failure to cooperate with the Vienna-based agency.
Revised: File photo of ElBaradei In remarks to the IAEA 's board, ElBaradei expressed frustration over Iran's failure to cooperate with the Vienna-based agency.
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Original: File photo of ElBaradei In remarks to the IAEA's board, ElBaradei expressed frustration over Iran's failure to cooperate with the Vienna-based agency.
Revised:  In remarks to the IAEA's board, ElBaradei expressed frustration over Iran's failure to cooperate with the Vienna-based agency.
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Original: have retaken top spot on the 2014 ladder after beating 22 points to 8 in Caloundra, Australia yesterday.
Revised: have retaken top spot on the 2014 ladder after beating 22 points to 8 in , yesterday.
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Original:  10-3 Noosa at half time.
Revised:  10–3 Noosa at half time.
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Original:  They couldn't capitalise, however, allowing Noosa to score one further try to take the score to 22-8.
Revised:  They couldn't capitalise, however, allowing Noosa to score one further try to take the score to 22–8.
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Original: Caloundra opened the scoring six minutes in through a penalty goal .
Revised: Caloundra opened the scoring six minutes in through a .
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Original:  Noosa would seemingly shut out the game with a converted try .
Revised:  Noosa would seemingly shut out the game with a .
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Original:  In the rounds other game, Toads defeated Maroochydore 31 points to 24.
Revised:  In the round's other game, Toads defeated Maroochydore 31 points to 24.
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Original: In the round's other game, Toads defeated Maroochydore 31 points to 24.
Revised: In the round's other game, defeated 31 points to 24.
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Original: The worst flooding in 27 years in Saudi Arabia has left at least 77 people dead as of today , and dozens more could be missing.
Revised: The worst flooding in 27 years in Saudi Arabia has left at least 77 people dead , and dozens more could be missing.
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Original:  The rainstorms mainly affected the western parts of the country, including the cities of Jeddah, Rabigh and Mecca, and the surrounding area.
Revised:  The rainstorms mainly affected western parts of the country, including the cities of Jeddah, Rabigh and Mecca, and the surrounding area.
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Original:  Many cars had been swept away and city roads  flooded, blocking traffic.
Revised:  Many cars had been swept away and city roads were flooded, blocking traffic.
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Original:  According to the Saudi Arabian Civil Defence Authority , emergency crews managed to rescue over 900 people
Revised:  The Saudi Arabian Civil Defence Authority , emergency crews managed to rescue over 900 people
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Original:  It tilted and part of it sank due to crowd pressure as it arrived near the Nazirpur river station . " Said a local police chief, Zakir Hossain, to the Agence France-Presse news agency.
Revised:  It tilted and part of it sank due to crowd pressure as it arrived near the Nazirpur river station , " Said a local police chief, Zakir Hossain, to the Agence France-Presse news agency.
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Original:  It tilted and part of it sank due to crowd pressure as it arrived near the Nazirpur river station . " Said a local police chief, Zakir Hossain, to the Agence France-Presse news agency.
Revised:  It tilted and part of it sank due to crowd pressure as it arrived near the Nazirpur river station . " said a local police chief, Zakir Hossain, to the Agence France-Presse news agency.
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Original: A ferry has sunk in Bangladesh earlier today, killing at least five people, according to the authorities.
Revised: A ferry has sunk in Bangladesh earlier today, killing at least five people, according to authorities.
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Original:  Three of the crew have been killed   
Revised:  Three of the crew have been killed . 
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Original:  Two Chechnyan rebels are a ccused of a 2007 bombing that derailed a train on the same line, wounding 27 people
Revised:  Two Chechnyan rebels are accused of a 2007 bombing that derailed a train on the same line, wounding 27 people
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Original: Russian railway infratructure is poorly maintained and plaugued by negligence and alcohol abuse, according to The Guardian.
Revised: Russian railway infrastructure is poorly maintained and plaugued by negligence and alcohol abuse, according to The Guardian.
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Original: Russian railway infratructure is poorly maintained and plaugued by negligence and alcohol abuse, according to The Guardian.
Revised: Russian railway infratructure is poorly maintained and plagued by negligence and alcohol abuse, according to The Guardian.
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Original:  [[File:Europe location RUS.png|File map of Russia's location in Europe  ]] The trainwreck occurred in the countryside of Tver, near Bologoye.
Revised:  [[File:Europe location RUS.png|File map of Russia's location in Europe . ]] The trainwreck occurred in the countryside of Tver, near Bologoye.
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Original:  President Dmitry Medvedev has ordered a full investigation and assistence for the victims.
Revised:  President Dmitry Medvedev has ordered a full investigation and assistance for the victims.
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Original:  No other vehicles were involved and the trucker pulled over uninjured   
Revised:  No other vehicles were involved and the trucker pulled over uninjured . 
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Original: A  similar van to the one in the accident , from archive Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's Interstate 10 highway yesterday.
Revised: A similar van to the one in the accident Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's Interstate 10 highway yesterday.
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Original: A file phto of a similar van to the one in the accident Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's Interstate 10 highway yesterday.
Revised: A file photo of a similar van to the one in the accident Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's Interstate 10 highway yesterday.
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Original: A file photo of a similar van to the one in the accident Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's Interstate 10 highway yesterday.
Revised: A file photo of a van similar to the one in the accident Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's Interstate 10 highway yesterday.
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Original: A file photo of a van similar to the one in the accident Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's Interstate 10 highway yesterday.
Revised:  Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's Interstate 10 highway yesterday.
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Original: A file photo of a van similar to the one in the accident Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's Interstate 10 highway yesterday.
Revised: A file photo of a van similar to the one in the accident Five people are dead and ten more are in a critical condition after a minivan packed with children rolled over on Louisiana's highway yesterday.
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Original:  There were thirteen children travelling in the back although there were not enough seatbelts and the van likely only had enough rear seats for ten, according to the Louisiana State Police .
Revised:  There were thirteen children travelling in the back although there were not enough seatbelts and the van likely only had enough rear seats for ten, according to the .
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Original:  The front driver's side tire on the GMC Safari blew out as the vehicle moved west.
Revised:  The front driver's side tire on the blew out as the vehicle moved west.
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Original:  A CNN photograph showed debris strewn around the scene.
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Original: Under Vanuatu law he must forfeit his seat for failure to notify the speaker . Natapei is flying back from Trinidad and Tobago.
Revised: Under Vanuatu law he must forfeit his seat . Natapei is flying back from Trinidad and Tobago.
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Original:  Natapei was in Trinidad and Tobago at the Commonwealth summit and his staff failed to fill the paperwork that notified the parliamentary speaker of his absence.
Revised:  Natapei was in Trinidad and Tobago at the Commonwealth summit and his staff failed to file the paperwork that notified the parliamentary speaker of his absence.
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Original:  Under Vanuatu law, since he missed three consecutive sittings  without notifying the speaker in writing, he must forfeit his seat.
Revised:  Under Vanuatu law, since he missed three consecutive sittings of parliament without notifying the speaker in writing, he must forfeit his seat.
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Original:  The nation is currently being run by a caretaker government ;
Revised:  The nation is currently being run by a caretaker government .
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Original: Natapei was elected Prime Minister on September 22nd 2008, as President of the socialist, Anglophone Vanua 'aku Pati party.
Revised: Natapei was elected Prime Minister on September 22nd 2008, as President of the socialist, AnglophoneVanua 'aku Pati party.
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Original: Natapei was elected Prime Minister on September 22nd 2008, as President of the socialist, AnglophoneVanua 'aku Pati party.
Revised: Natapei was elected Prime Minister on September 22nd 2008, as President of the socialist, Anglophone Vanua 'aku Pati party.
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Original:  And one of the rejected project was to introduce a parking lot beneath the statue's square   .
Revised:  And one of the rejected project was to introduce a parking lot beneath the statue's square . .
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Original:  Initially it was expected the statue return in 2005, but when the Expo 2010 was awarded to Shanghai instead of Moscow the restoration process was stalled cause of the shortage of funds.
Revised:  Initially it was expected the statue return in 2005, but when the Expo 2010 was awarded to Shanghai instead of Moscow the restoration process was stalled due to a the shortage of funds.
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Original: File:1937urss.jpg|Soviet Pavilion at the 1987 World's Fair in Paris]] [[File:Worker and Kolkhoznitsa.jpg|Worker and Kolkhoznitsa as seen in Moscow in 1999 ]] On Saturday, Worker and Kolkhoznitsa, a giant statue of Soviet times, was returned to a pedestal in Moscow, Russia.
Revised: File:1937urss.jpg|Soviet Pavilion at the 1937 World's Fair in Paris]] [[File:Worker and Kolkhoznitsa.jpg|Worker and Kolkhoznitsa as seen in Moscow in 1999 ]] On Saturday, Worker and Kolkhoznitsa, a giant statue of Soviet times, was returned to a pedestal in Moscow, Russia.
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Original:  Initially it was expected the statue return in 2005, but when the Expo 2010 was awarded to Shanghai instead of Moscow the restoration process was stalled due to a the shortage of funds.
Revised:  The statue was initially expected to return in 2005, but when the Expo 2010 was awarded to Shanghai instead of Moscow the restoration process was stalled due to a the shortage of funds.
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Original:  Initially it was expected the statue return in 2005, but when the Expo 2010 was awarded to Shanghai instead of Moscow the restoration process was stalled due to a the shortage of funds.
Revised:  Initially it was expected the statue return in 2005, but when the Expo 2010 was awarded to Shanghai instead of Moscow the restoration process was stalled due to a shortage of funds.
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Original: File:1937urss.jpg|Soviet Pavilion at the 1937 World's Fair in Paris File:Worker and Kolkhoznitsa.jpg|Worker and Kolkhoznitsa as seen in Moscow in 1999 On Saturday, Worker and Kolkhoznitsa, a giant statue of Soviet times, was returned to a pedestal in Moscow, Russia.
Revised:  File:Worker and Kolkhoznitsa.jpg|Worker and Kolkhoznitsa as seen in Moscow in 1999 On Saturday, Worker and Kolkhoznitsa, a giant statue of Soviet times, was returned to a pedestal in Moscow, Russia.
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Original: File:1937urss.jpg|Soviet Pavilion at the 1937 World's Fair in Paris File:Worker and Kolkhoznitsa.jpg|Worker and Kolkhoznitsa as seen in Moscow in 1999 On Saturday, Worker and Kolkhoznitsa, a giant statue of Soviet times, was returned to a pedestal in Moscow, Russia.
Revised: File:1937urss.jpg|Soviet Pavilion at the 1937 World's Fair in Paris On Saturday, Worker and Kolkhoznitsa, a giant statue of Soviet times, was returned to a pedestal in Moscow, Russia.
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Original:  The eight leaders pledged to double the previously proposed aid of $25 billion to $50 billion  by 2010.
Revised:  The eight leaders pledged to double the previously proposed aid of $25 billion to $50 billion a year by 2010.
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Original:  The group also declared they would cancel the debt of the 18 poorest African nations.
Revised:  The group also confirmed an an earlier announcement that they would cancel the debt of the 18 poorest African nations.
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Original:  The group also confirmed an an earlier announcement that they would cancel the debt of the 18 poorest African nations.
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Original:  The group also confirmed an earlier announcement that they would cancel the debt of the 18 poorest African nations .
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Original: Blair with Tanzania's President Benjamin Mkapa and George Bush, attends a meeting of the G8 leaders and representatives of the Emerging Nations On Friday, the annual meeting of the leaders of the world's eight most powerful countries, the Group of Eight (G8), ended ahead of schedule with few resolutions to the disappointment of many.
Revised:  On Friday, the annual meeting of the leaders of the world's eight most powerful countries, the Group of Eight (G8), ended ahead of schedule with few resolutions to the disappointment of many.
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Original:  That was till on the cards.
Revised:  That was still on the cards.
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Original:  Because we'd worked so were with the under-23s together as a unit.
Revised:  Because we'd worked so well with the under-23s together as a unit.
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Original:  Had a couple of camps in the first part of 2013, getting ready for the world championships in Turkey in September.
Revised:  Had a couple of camps in the first part of 2013, getting ready for the world championships in in September.
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Original:  Tom Kyle addresses his players at the  Tom Kyle: No, it was all voluntary so was, well, not voluntary;
Revised:  Tom Kyle addresses his players at the . Tom Kyle: No, it was all voluntary so was, well, not voluntary;
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Original:  was getting a little bit of money, not  great deal.
Revised:  was getting a little bit of money, not a great deal.
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Original:  Went top a national league round in Sydney and then we bused them down to Canberra for a camp.
Revised:  Went to a national league round in Sydney and then we bused them down to Canberra for a camp.
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Original:  It was 18 months, nearly two years since London [ it was ten months] and nobody had really contacted them.
Revised:  It was eighteen months, nearly two years since London [ it was ten months] and nobody had really contacted them.
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Original:  And then we came back to the Gliders and got ready for Bangkok . Bangkok was our first tour with the Gliders, which was a huge success.
Revised:  And then we came back to the Gliders and got ready for . Bangkok was our first tour with the Gliders, which was a huge success.
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Original:  We've since then been to Osaka in February, which was another good outing for the girls.
Revised:  We've since then been to in February, which was another good outing for the girls.
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Original:  Five day experience with playing five games against the Japanese .
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Original:  Then in March we brought them here [Canada] for a tournament with the Netherlands , Canada and Japan, and then down to the United States for a four game series against the US.
Revised:  Then in March we brought them here [Canada] for a tournament with the , Canada and Japan, and then down to the United States for a four game series against the US.
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Original:  Then back home for a month and then got to go to Europe, where we played in Frankfurt for the four games, and to Papandaal with the Netherlands team.
Revised:  Then back home for a month and then got to go to Europe, where we played in for the four games, and to Papandaal with the Netherlands team.
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