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Original:  Germany's defeat of the French army and occupation of France in 1940, the imposition of a Vichy regime on Madagascar and the subsequent occupation of the island by the British in 1942 further tarnished the colonial government's image.
Revised:  Germany's defeat of the French army and occupation of France in 1940, the imposition of a Vichy regime on Madagascar and the subsequent capture of the island by the British in 1942 further tarnished the colonial government's image.
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Original:  The French generally suspected that the rebellion was secretly supported by foreign powers, most importantly by the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The French generally suspected that the rebellion was secretly supported by foreign powers, most significantly by the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Two British nationals, namely ex-Major John Morris, and Major Nicholson who worked at the British consulate in Antananarivo, were believed to stir up Malagasy nationalist activities.
Revised:  Two British nationals, namely ex-Major John Morris, and Major Nicholson who worked at the British consulate in Antananarivo, were accused of stirring up Malagasy nationalist activities.
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Original:  There also circulated rumours about American support for the rebels, though these were completely imaginary .
Revised:  There also circulated rumours about American support for the rebels, though no evidence emerged to support these claims .
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Original: National trauma The Uprising and its repression caused trauma that continues to manifest in the Malagasy population.
Revised: National trauma The uprising and its repression caused trauma that continues to manifest in the Malagasy population.
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Original:  "The Good, The Bad, and the Indifferent", Diacritics, p.102, Vol. 21, No. 4, pp. 101-115. JSTOR.org. author, and librarian at the Natal Society Library.
Revised:  "The Good, The Bad, and the Indifferent", Diacritics, p.102, Vol. 21, No. 4, pp. 101–115. JSTOR.org. author, and librarian at the Natal Society Library.
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Original:  JSTOR.org. author, and librarian at the Natal Society Library .
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Original:  the Popular Origins of Western Music.  
Revised:  the Popular Origins of Western Music. Letters Journal Vol. 88, No. 1 (Feb., 2007), pp. 134-139, as it is available via JSTOR website
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Original:  all that is required to disprove a theory logically , is one counterexample.
Revised:  all that is required to disprove a theory logically is one counterexample.
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Original: Albert Einstein's discovery of the general relativity theory relied upon thought-experiments and mathematics, and empirical methods only became relevant when confirmation was looked for.
Revised: Albert Einstein's discovery of the general relativity theory relied upon thought experiments and mathematics. Empirical methods only became relevant when confirmation was looked for.
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Original:  Thought experiments are almost standard procedure in Philosophy , where a conjecture is tested out in the imagination for possible effects on experience;
Revised:  Thought experiments are almost standard procedure in philosophy , where a conjecture is tested out in the imagination for possible effects on experience;
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Original:  Logical positivism was a perhaps extreme version of this  .
Revised:  Logical positivism was a perhaps extreme version of this practice, though this claim is open to debate .
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Original: This article is not verified as it does not cite any references or sources.
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Original:  Empirical methods are studied extensively in the philosophy of science but cannot be used directly in fields whose hypotheses are not invalidated by real experiment (mathematics, theology, ideology).
Revised:  Empirical methods are studied extensively in the philosophy of science but cannot be used directly in fields whose hypotheses are not falsified by real experiment (mathematics, theology, ideology).
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Original: Quasi-empirical methods are  applied in science and in mathematics .
Revised: Quasi-empirical methods are methods applied in science and in mathematics .
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Original:  The term "empirical methods" refers to experiment, disclosure of apparatus for reproduction of experiments, and other ways in which science is validated by scientists.
Revised:  The term "empirical methods" refers to experiment, disclosure of apparatus for reproducibility, by which scientific findings are validated by other scientists.
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Original:  Empirical methods are studied extensively in the philosophy of science but cannot be used directly in fields whose hypotheses are not falsified by real experiment ( mathematics, theology, ideology).
Revised:  Empirical methods are studied extensively in the philosophy of science , but they cannot be used directly in fields whose hypotheses are not falsified by real experiment ( mathematics, theology, ideology).
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Original:  Empirical methods are studied extensively in the philosophy of science but cannot be used directly in fields whose hypotheses are not falsified by real experiment ( mathematics, theology, ideology).
Revised:  Empirical methods are studied extensively in the philosophy of science but cannot be used directly in fields whose hypotheses cannot be falsified by real experiment ( mathematics, theology, ideology).
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Original:  Post-20th-century philosophy of mathematics is mostly concerned with quasi-empirical methods especially as reflected in  actual mathematical practice of working mathematicians.
Revised:  Post-20th-century philosophy of mathematics is mostly concerned with quasi-empirical mathematical methods, especially as reflected in actual mathematical practice of working mathematicians.
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Original:  Post-20th-century philosophy of mathematics is mostly concerned with quasi-empirical methods especially as reflected in  actual mathematical practice of working mathematicians.
Revised:  Post-20th-century philosophy of mathematics is mostly concerned with quasi-empirical methods especially as reflected in the actual mathematical practice of working mathematicians.
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Original:  See also quasi-empiricism in mathematics empirical methods philosophy of science philosophy of mathematics mathematical practice
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Original:  See also quasi-empiricism in mathematics empirical methods philosophy of science philosophy of mathematics mathematical practice
Revised:  See also quasi-empiricism in mathematics empirical methods philosophy of science 
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Original:  Prasanna Deb Raikut (forest and excise), Mukunda Behari Mallick (cooperative credit and rural indebtedness), Sir Khwaja Nazimuddin (home), Nawab Khwaja Habibullah (agriculture and industry), Huseyn Shaheed Suhrawardy (commerce and labour), Nawab Musharraf Hussain (judicial and legislative affairs), and Syed Nausher Ali (public health and local URL Huq promoted financial and land reforms with the Bengal Agricultural Debtors'
Revised:  Prasanna Deb Raikut (forest and excise), Mukunda Behari Mallick (cooperative credit and rural indebtedness), Sir Khwaja Nazimuddin (home), Nawab Khwaja Habibullah (agriculture and industry), Huseyn Shaheed Suhrawardy (commerce and labour), Nawab Musharraf Hussain (judicial and legislative affairs), and Syed Nausher Ali (public health and local self-government). Huq promoted financial and land reforms with the Bengal Agricultural Debtors'
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Original:  The HEIC did not recognize Joy as an official consul but allowed him to be a Commercial URL The American Consulate General was established during formal British rule.
Revised:  The HEIC did not recognize Joy as an official consul but allowed him to be a Commercial Agent. The American Consulate General was established during formal British rule.
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Original:  Britain's wartime Prime Minister Winston Churchill has been held responsible for the famine by prominent Indians, including Nobel laureate Amartya Sen and politician Shashi URL When British civil servants sent letters to London regarding the famine situation, Churchill once responded by saying "Why hasn't Gandhi died yet?".
Revised:  Britain's wartime Prime Minister Winston Churchill has been held responsible for the famine by prominent Indians, including Nobel laureate Amartya Sen and politician Shashi Tharoor. When British civil servants sent letters to London regarding the famine situation, Churchill once responded by saying "Why hasn't Gandhi died yet?".
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Original:  The Company School of Painting in Calcutta, Murshidabad, and Patna saw Mughal miniatures absorb images of British colonial officials in place of Mughal URL European painters produced numerous works in Bengal since the 18th-century.
Revised:  The Company School of Painting in Calcutta, Murshidabad, and Patna saw Mughal miniatures absorb images of British colonial officials in place of Mughal officials. European painters produced numerous works in Bengal since the 18th-century.
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Original:  A racecourse was also set up in Ramna by the Dacca URL The Bengal Public Gaming (Amendment) Act (Act No.
Revised:  A racecourse was also set up in Ramna by the Dacca Club. The Bengal Public Gaming (Amendment) Act (Act No.
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Original:  The Indian Rebellion of 1857 caused the British government to assume direct control of India's administration under the Government of India Act , 1858.
Revised:  The Indian Rebellion of 1857 caused the British government to assume direct control of India's administration under the Government of India Act 1858.
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Original:  Bengal Legislative Council ( 1862-1947 ) The Legislative Council met in Calcutta Town Hall The British government began to appoint legislative councils under the Indian Councils Act 1861.
Revised:  Bengal Legislative Council ( 1862–1947 ) The Legislative Council met in Calcutta Town Hall The British government began to appoint legislative councils under the Indian Councils Act 1861.
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Original:  Under the Government of India Act , 1935, the council became the upper chamber of the Bengali legislature.
Revised:  Under the Government of India Act 1935, the council became the upper chamber of the Bengali legislature.
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Original:  Dyarchy (1920–37) British India's Montagu-Chelmsford Reforms of 1919, enacted in 1921, expanded the Bengal Legislative Council to 140 members to include more elected Indian members.
Revised:  Dyarchy (1920–37) British India's Montagu–Chelmsford Reforms of 1919, enacted in 1921, expanded the Bengal Legislative Council to 140 members to include more elected Indian members.
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Original:  Bengal Legislative Assembly ( 1935-1947 ) The Government of India Act, 1935 established the Bengal Legislative Assembly as the lower chamber of the Bengali legislature.
Revised:  Bengal Legislative Assembly ( 1935–1947 ) The Government of India Act, 1935 established the Bengal Legislative Assembly as the lower chamber of the Bengali legislature.
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Original:  Huq pursued a policy of Hindu-Muslim unity.
Revised:  Huq pursued a policy of Hindu–Muslim unity.
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Original:  The British Expedition to Tibet took place between 1903 and 1904.
Revised:  The British expedition to Tibet took place between 1903 and 1904.
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Original: ]] The United States of America began sending envoys to Fort William in the 18th-century . President George Washington nominated Benjamin Joy as the first Consul to Fort William on 19 November 1792.
Revised: ]] The United States of America began sending envoys to Fort William in the 18th century . President George Washington nominated Benjamin Joy as the first Consul to Fort William on 19 November 1792.
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Original:  Britain's wartime Prime Minister Winston Churchill has been held responsible for the famine by prominent Indians, including Nobel laureate Amartya Sen and politician Shashi Tharoor.
Revised:  Britain's wartime Prime Minister Winston Churchill has been held responsible for the famine by prominent Indians, including politician Shashi Tharoor.
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Original:  Considering the Irish State unable to protect them, many members of the Anglo-Irish class subsequently left Ireland forever, fearing that they would be subject to discriminatory legislation and social pressures.
Revised:  Considering the Irish state unable to protect them, many members of the Anglo-Irish class subsequently left Ireland forever, fearing that they would be subject to discriminatory legislation and social pressures.
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Original: The Anglo-Irishmen Edmund Burke , Richard Brinsley Sheridan, Henry Grattan, Lord Castlereagh, George Canning, Lord Macartney, Thomas Spring Rice, Charles Stewart Parnell, and Edward Carson played major roles in British politics.
Revised: The Anglo-Irishmen , Richard Brinsley Sheridan, Henry Grattan, Lord Castlereagh, George Canning, Lord Macartney, Thomas Spring Rice, Charles Stewart Parnell, and Edward Carson played major roles in British politics.
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Revised: S. OpenT48T30CUTThe Open ChampionshipCUTCUTT22CUTCUTPGA ChampionshipCUTCUTT52T43 Tournament 2010 2011 2012 2013 2014 2015 2016 2017 2018Masters TournamentT301T50T25CUTT38CUT3CUTU.S. OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25PGA ChampionshipT58U.S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT
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Original: OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25PGA ChampionshipT58U.S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT Summary Tournament Wins 2nd 3rd Top-5 Top-10 Top-25 Events Cuts madeMasters Tournament 1 0 1 2 2 4 11 7PGA Championship 0 0 0 0 0 3 14 11U.S. Open 0 0 0 0 2 5 12 8The Open Championship 0 0 0 0 1 6 14 8Totals 1 0 1 2 5 18 51 34 Most consecutive cuts made –
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Original: OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25PGA ChampionshipT58U.S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT Summary Tournament Wins 2nd 3rd Top-5 Top-10 Top-25 Events Cuts madeMasters Tournament 1 0 1 2 2 4 11 7PGA Championship 0 0 0 0 0 3 14 11U.S. Open 0 0 0 0 2 5 12 8The Open Championship 0 0 0 0 1 6 14 8Totals 1 0 1 2 5 18 51 34 Most consecutive cuts made –
Revised: OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25PGA ChampionshipT58U.S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT Summary Tournament Wins 2nd 3rd Top-5 Top-10 Top-25 Events Cuts madeMasters Tournament 1 0 1 2 2 4 11 7PGA Championship 0 0 0 0 0 3 14 11U.S. Open 0 0 0 0 2 5 12 8The Open Championship 0 0 0 0 1 6 14 8Totals 1 0 1 2 5 18 52 35 Most consecutive cuts made –
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Original: OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25T26PGA ChampionshipT58U .S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT Summary Tournament Wins 2nd 3rd Top-5 Top-10 Top-25 Events Cuts madeMasters Tournament 1 0 1 2 2 4 12 8PGA Championship 0 0 0 0 0 3 14 11U.S. Open 0 0 0 0 2 5 12 8The Open Championship 0 0 0 0 1 6 14 8Totals 1 0 1 2 5 18 52 35 Most consecutive cuts made –
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Original: OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25T26PGA ChampionshipT58U .S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT Summary Tournament Wins 2nd 3rd Top-5 Top-10 Top-25 Events Cuts madeMasters Tournament 1 0 1 2 2 4 12 8PGA Championship 0 0 0 0 0 3 14 11U.S. Open 0 0 0 0 2 5 12 8The Open Championship 0 0 0 0 1 6 14 8Totals 1 0 1 2 5 18 52 35 Most consecutive cuts made –
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Original: OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25T26PGA ChampionshipT58U .S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT Summary Tournament Wins 2nd 3rd Top-5 Top-10 Top-25 Events Cuts madeMasters Tournament 1 0 1 2 2 4 12 8PGA Championship 0 0 0 0 0 3 14 11U.S. Open 0 0 0 0 2 5 12 8The Open Championship 0 0 0 0 1 6 14 8Totals 1 0 1 2 5 18 52 35 Most consecutive cuts made –
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Original: OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25T26PGA ChampionshipT58CUTU.S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT Summary Tournament Wins 2nd 3rd Top-5 Top-10 Top-25 Events Cuts madeMasters Tournament 1 0 1 2 2 4 12 8PGA Championship 0 0 0 0 0 3 15 11U.S. Open 0 0 0 0 2 5 12 8The Open Championship 0 0 0 0 1 6 14 8Totals 1 0 1 2 5 18 53 35 Most consecutive cuts made –
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Original: OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25T26PGA ChampionshipT58CUTU.S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT Summary Tournament Wins 2nd 3rd Top-5 Top-10 Top-25 Events Cuts madeMasters Tournament 1 0 1 2 2 4 12 8PGA Championship 0 0 0 0 0 3 15 11U.S. Open 0 0 0 0 2 5 12 8The Open Championship 0 0 0 0 1 6 14 8Totals 1 0 1 2 5 18 53 35 Most consecutive cuts made –
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Original: OpenT16T9T3814CUT7T23CUTCUTThe Open ChampionshipT14T16CUTT15T7T68T18T62CUTPGA ChampionshipT18T12T59CUTT15T37T42T48T42 Tournament201920202021Masters TournamentCUTT25T26PGA ChampionshipT58CUTU.S. OpenThe Open ChampionshipNT Summary Tournament Wins 2nd 3rd Top-5 Top-10 Top-25 Events Cuts madeMasters Tournament 1 0 1 2 2 4 12 8PGA Championship 0 0 0 0 0 3 15 11U.S. Open 0 0 0 0 2 5 12 8The Open Championship 0 0 0 0 1 6 14 8Totals 1 0 1 2 5 18 53 35 Most consecutive cuts made –
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Original:  He was active in Switzerland during the last period of his life. 
Revised:  He was active in Switzerland during the last period of his life. The Swiss argue he was born Swiss and always was Swiss.
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Original:  He began with simple scenes of common people living off of the earth ‒ peasants, farmers, shepherds ‒ and moved toward a thematic symbolist style that continued to embody the landscapes around him while intertwining pantheistic images representing "a primeval Arcadia . "  Bachmann, P35 Over the course of his life he moved from both the physical and emotional internal, such as his scene of motherhood in a stable, to the grand external views of the mountain scenery where he chose to live.
Revised:  He began with simple scenes of common people living off of the earth ‒ peasants, farmers, shepherds ‒ and moved toward a thematic symbolist style that continued to embody the landscapes around him while intertwining pantheistic images representing "a primeval Arcadia " Bachmann, P35 Over the course of his life he moved from both the physical and emotional internal, such as his scene of motherhood in a stable, to the grand external views of the mountain scenery where he chose to live.
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