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Original:  This is false info presented on wiki by the hands of bog pharma that refutes the claims of basic vitamins and minerals being able to cure disease.
Revised:  This is false info presented on wiki by the hands of big pharma that refutes the claims of basic vitamins and minerals being able to cure disease.
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Original:  Beginning in the 1930s , the Shutes in Canadadeveloped a megadose vitamin E therapy for cardiovascular and circulatory complaints , naming it the "Shute protocol".
Revised:  Beginning in the 1930s in Canada, a megadose vitamin E therapy for cardiovascular and circulatory complaints , naming it the "Shute protocol".
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Original:  Beginning in the 1930s , the Shutes in Canadadeveloped a megadose vitamin E therapy for cardiovascular and circulatory complaints , naming it the "Shute protocol".
Revised:  Beginning in the 1930s , the Shutes in Canadadeveloped a megadose vitamin E therapy for cardiovascular and circulatory complaints was developed, named the "Shute protocol".
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Original:  Megavitamin therapy is typically used in alternative medicine by practitioners who call their approach orthomolecular medicine.
Revised:  Megavitamin therapy is typically used in alternative medicine by practitioners of orthomolecular medicine.
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Original:  Vitamins are useful in preventing and treating illnesses specifically associated with dietary vitamin shortfalls, but the conclusions of  medical research are that the broad claims of disease treatment by advocates of megavitamin therapy are unsubstantiated by the available evidence.
Revised:  Vitamins are useful in preventing and treating illnesses specifically associated with dietary vitamin shortfalls, but the conclusions of some medical research are that the broad claims of disease treatment by advocates of megavitamin therapy are unsubstantiated by the available evidence.
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Original:  Vitamins are useful in preventing and treating illnesses specifically associated with dietary vitamin shortfalls, but the conclusions of  medical research are that the broad claims of disease treatment by advocates of megavitamin therapy are unsubstantiated by the available evidence.
Revised:  Vitamins are useful in preventing and treating illnesses specifically associated with dietary vitamin shortfalls, but the conclusions of medical research are that the claims of disease treatment by advocates of megavitamin therapy are unsubstantiated by the available evidence.
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Original:  It is generally accepted that doses of any vitamin greatly in excess of nutritional requirements will result either in toxicity (vitamins A and D) or in the excess simply being metabolised;
Revised:  This seems to point to doses of any vitamin greatly in excess of nutritional requirements will result either in toxicity (vitamins A and D) or in the excess simply being metabolised;
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Original:  It is generally accepted that doses of any vitamin greatly in excess of nutritional requirements will result either in toxicity (vitamins A and D) or in the excess simply being metabolised;
Revised:  It is generally accepted that doses of any vitamin greatly in excess of nutritional requirements resulting either in toxicity (vitamins A and D) or in the excess simply being metabolised;
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Original:  thus  evidence in favour of vitamin supplementation supports only doses in the normal range.
Revised:  thus the evidence in favour of vitamin supplementation supports only doses in the normal range.
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Original:  This seems to point to doses of any vitamin greatly in excess of nutritional requirements resulting either in toxicity (vitamins A and D) or in the excess simply being metabolised;
Revised:  It is generally accepted that doses of any vitamin greatly in excess of nutritional requirements resulting either in toxicity (vitamins A and D) or in the excess simply being metabolised;
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Original:  This seems to point to doses of any vitamin greatly in excess of nutritional requirements resulting either in toxicity (vitamins A and D) or in the excess simply being metabolised;
Revised:  This seems to point to doses of any vitamin greatly in excess of nutritional requirements will result either in toxicity (vitamins A and D) or in the excess simply being metabolised;
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Original:  thus the evidence in favour of vitamin supplementation supports only doses in the normal range.
Revised:  thus evidence in favour of vitamin supplementation supports only doses in the normal range.
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Original:  In 2008, a colony of bumble bees was discovered on Mount Everest at more than above sea level, the highest known altitude for an insect Citation needed .
Revised:  In 2008, a colony of bumble bees was discovered on Mount Everest at more than above sea level, the highest known altitude for an insect .
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Original:  Among animals, only few mammals (such as yak, ibex, Tibetan gazelle , vicunas, llamas, mountain goats, etc.) and certain birds are known to have completely adapted to high-altitude environments.
Revised:  Among animals, only few mammals (such as yaks, ibexes, Tibetan gazelles , vicunas, llamas, mountain goats, etc.) and certain birds are known to have completely adapted to high-altitude environments.
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Original:  In 2008, a colony of bumble bees was discovered on Mount Everest at more than above sea level , the highest known altitude for an insect .
Revised:  Bumble bees were discovered on Mount Everest at more than above sea level , the highest known altitude for an insect .
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Original:  In 2008, a colony of bumble bees was discovered on Mount Everest at more than above sea level , the highest known altitude for an insect .
Revised:  In 2008, a colony of bumble bees was discovered on Mount Everest at more than above sea level .
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Original:  In subsequent tests some of the bees were still able to fly in a flight chamber which recreated the thinner air of .
Revised:  In subsequent tests , bumblebees were still able to fly in a flight chamber which recreated the thinner air of .
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Original:  The concept is an example of value sensitive design, i.e., to take human values into account in a well-defined manner throughout the whole process and may have been derived from this .
Revised:  The concept is an example of value sensitive design, i.e., to take human values into account in a well-defined manner throughout the whole process .
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Original: History and background The privacy by design framework was developed by Dr.
Revised: History and background The privacy by design framework was developed by 
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Original: The executive summary makes the following recommendations to EU institutions: To ensure strong privacy protection, including privacy by design, in the ePrivacy Regulation .
Revised: The executive summary makes the following recommendations to EU institutions: To ensure strong privacy protection, including privacy by design, in the ePrivacy Regulation ,
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Original:  Continue to promote privacy by design, where appropriate in cooperation with other data protection authorities in the European Data Protection Board (EDPB), Support coordinated and effective enforcement of Article 25 of the GDPR and related provisions, Provide guidance to controllers on the appropriate implementation of the principle laid down in the legal base, and Together with the DPAs of Austria, Ireland and Schleswig-Holstein, award privacy friendly apps in the mobile health domain.
Revised:  Continue to promote privacy by design, where appropriate in cooperation with other data protection authorities in the European Data Protection Board (EDPB), Support coordinated and effective enforcement of Article 25 of the GDPR and related provisions, Provide guidance to controllers on the appropriate implementation of the principle laid down in the legal base, and Together with data protection authorities of Austria, Ireland and Schleswig-Holstein, award privacy friendly apps in the mobile health domain.
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Original: Privacy by design is an approach to systems engineering initially developed by Ann Cavoukian and formalized in a joint report on privacy-enhancing technologies by a joint team of the Information and Privacy Commissioner of Ontario (Canada), the Dutch Data Protection Authority  and the Netherlands Organisation for Applied Scientific Research in 1995.
Revised: Privacy by design is an approach to systems engineering initially developed by Ann Cavoukian and formalized in a joint report on privacy-enhancing technologies by a joint team of the Information and Privacy Commissioner of Ontario (Canada), the Dutch Data Protection Authority , and the Netherlands Organisation for Applied Scientific Research in 1995.
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Original:  The concept is an example of value sensitive design, i.e., to take human values into account in a well-defined manner throughout the whole process.
Revised:  The concept is an example of value sensitive design, i.e., taking human values into account in a well-defined manner throughout the whole process.
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Original:  The concept is an example of value sensitive design, i.e., to take human values into account in a well-defined manner throughout the whole process.
Revised:  The concept is an example of value sensitive design, i.e., to take human values into account in a well-defined manner throughout the process.
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Original:  Cavoukian's approach to privacy has been criticized as being vague, difficult to enforce its adoption, difficult to apply to certain disciplines, as well as prioritizing corporate interests over consumers' interests and placing insufficient emphasis on minimizing data collection.
Revised:  Cavoukian's approach to privacy has been criticized as being vague, challenging to enforce its adoption, difficult to apply to certain disciplines, as well as prioritizing corporate interests over consumers' interests and placing insufficient emphasis on minimizing data collection.
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Original: Privacy by design has been critiqued as "vague" and leaving "many open questions about their application when engineering systems ".
Revised: Privacy by design has been critiqued as "vague" and leaving "many open questions about their application when engineering systems ."
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Original:  The objective of their paper is to provide an "initial inquiry into the practice of privacy by design from an engineering perspective in order to contribute to the closing of the gap between policymakers’ and engineers’ understanding of privacy by design ".
Revised:  The objective of their paper is to provide an "initial inquiry into the practice of privacy by design from an engineering perspective in order to contribute to the closing of the gap between policymakers’ and engineers’ understanding of privacy by design ."
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Original:  In 2011, the Danish National It and Telecom Agency published as a discussion paper on "New Digital Security Models" the publication references "Privacy by Design" as a key goal in creating a security model that is compliant with "Privacy by Design ".
Revised:  In 2011, the Danish National It and Telecom Agency published as a discussion paper on "New Digital Security Models" the publication references "Privacy by Design" as a key goal in creating a security model that is compliant with "Privacy by Design ."
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Original:  The final lesson learned is that “regulators must do more than merely recommend the adoption and implementation of privacy by design ”.
Revised:  The final lesson learned is that “regulators must do more than merely recommend the adoption and implementation of privacy by design .”
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Original:  He formerly served as governor of Northern Bahr el Ghazal from 27 March 2008 to 2014.
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Original:  The Chief of General Staffs is the highest-ranking military officer in the Sudan People’s Liberation Army (now South Sudan People’s Defence Forces) and the principal military adviser to the President of the Republic of South Sudan and the National Security Council. 
Revised:  The Chief of General Staffs was the highest-ranking military officer in the Sudan People’s Liberation Army (now South Sudan People’s Defence Forces) and the principal military adviser to the President of the Republic of South Sudan and the National Security Council. 
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Original:  The Chief of General Staffs is the highest-ranking military officer in the Sudan People’s Liberation Army (now South Sudan People’s Defence Forces) and the principal military adviser to the President of the Republic of South Sudan and the National Security Council. 
Revised:  The Chief of General Staffs is the highest-ranking military officer in the SPLA (now South Sudan People’s Defence Forces) and the principal military adviser to the President of the Republic of South Sudan and the National Security Council. 
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Original:  The Chief of General Staffs is the highest-ranking military officer in the Sudan People’s Liberation Army (now South Sudan People’s Defence Forces) and the principal military adviser to the President of the Republic of South Sudan and the National Security Council. 
Revised:  The Chief of General Staffs is the highest-ranking military officer in the Sudan People’s Liberation Army (now South Sudan People’s Defence Forces) , and also the principal military adviser to the President of the Republic of South Sudan and the National Security Council. 
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Original: Biography Paul Malong Awan (born 1962), also known as Paul Malong Awan Anei, King Paul, and General Paul, is a South Sudanese politician and military figure.
Revised:  Paul Malong Awan (born 1962), also known as Paul Malong Awan Anei, King Paul, and General Paul, is a South Sudanese politician and military figure.
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Original:    Malong has more than 100 wives.
Revised:  Malong has more than 100 wives. Malong has more than 100 wives.
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Original:    Malong has more than 100 wives.
Revised:  Marital status Malong has more than 100 wives.
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Original:  Marital status Malong has more than 100 wives.
Revised:  Malong has more than 100 wives.
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Original:  and thus increases the need for grid upgrades Grid failure event Electricity may still be available to local area in many circumstances Electricity may be not available due to grid  Consumer choices May choose to purchase any legal system May choose to purchase offerings of the power company Reliability and Maintenance requirements photovoltaics,
Revised:  and thus increases the need for grid upgrades Grid failure event Electricity may still be available to local area in many circumstances Electricity may be not available due to grid Consumer choices May choose to purchase any legal system May choose to purchase offerings of the power companies depending on market Reliability and Maintenance requirements photovoltaics,
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Original: Commentators claim citation needed%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% that householders who buy their electricity with green energy tariffs can reduce their carbon usage further than with microgeneration and at a lower cost.
Revised: Commentators claim %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% that householders who buy their electricity with green energy tariffs can reduce their carbon usage further than with microgeneration and at a lower cost.
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Original:  Microgeneration can dynamically balance the supply and demand for electric power, by producing more power during periods of high demand and high grid prices, and less power during periods of low demand and low grid prices.
Revised:  Most forms of microgeneration can dynamically balance the supply and demand for electric power, by producing more power during periods of high demand and high grid prices, and less power during periods of low demand and low grid prices.
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Original: Ryse Energy G-11 small wind turbine in Scotland.
Revised: A group of small-scale wind turbines providing electricity to a community in Dali, Yunnan, China
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Original: In December 2014, the Polish government will vote on a bill which calls for microgeneration, as well as large scale wind farms in the Baltic Sea as a solution to cut back on co2 emissions from the country's coal plants as well as to reduce Polish dependence on Russian gas.
Revised: In December 2014, the Polish government will vote on a bill which calls for microgeneration, as well as large scale wind farms in the Baltic Sea as a solution to cut back on CO2 emissions from the country's coal plants as well as to reduce Polish dependence on Russian gas.
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Original:  OtherPower and Home Power as popular diy microgeneration magazines
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Original:   Pharmaceutical Executive, February 2011.
Revised:  , Pharmaceutical Executive, February 2011.
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Original:  Applied Clinical Trials, August 2008  adaptive clinical trialsBlake-Michaels, M., “Operation Adaptive”, Applied Clinical Trials, October 2009, and clinical trials for medical devicesBlake-Michaels, M., “Considerations for Medical Device Trials", Applied Clinical Trials, August 2010, as well as articles on clinical trial trendsStergiopoulos, S., Getz, K., Soenen, M., “Honing Reforms from Clinical Development”, Pharmaceutical Executive, February 2011.
Revised:  Applied Clinical Trials, August 2008 , adaptive clinical trialsBlake-Michaels, M., “Operation Adaptive”, Applied Clinical Trials, October 2009, and clinical trials for medical devicesBlake-Michaels, M., “Considerations for Medical Device Trials", Applied Clinical Trials, August 2010, as well as articles on clinical trial trendsStergiopoulos, S., Getz, K., Soenen, M., “Honing Reforms from Clinical Development”, Pharmaceutical Executive, February 2011.
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Original:  DE librarians may provide technical support or reference service over the phone, using instant messaging, replying to emails and reference service request forms, or through videoconferencing  .
Revised:  DE librarians may provide technical support or reference service over the phone, using instant messaging, replying to emails and reference service request forms, or through videoconferencing . .
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Original: Recognizing that distance education offerings were growing in post-secondary educational institutions, the Association of College and Research Libraries (ACRL) published ‘’Guidelines for Distance Learning Libraries in 2000’’  Gandhi, Smiti.
Revised: Recognizing that distance education offerings were growing in post-secondary educational institutions, the Association of College and Research Libraries (ACRL) published ‘’Guidelines for Distance Learning Libraries in 2000’’ . Gandhi, Smiti.
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Original:  Web. 16 Jul. 2011.
Revised:  Web. 16 Jul. 2011
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Original:  Distance education librarian A distance education or distance learning librarian is a specialized academic librarian whose primary duties involve serving the information needs of distance education students, faculty, and staff.
Revised: A Distance education librarian A distance education or distance learning librarian is a specialized academic librarian whose primary duties involve serving the information needs of distance education students, faculty, and staff.
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Original:  Distance education librarian A distance education or distance learning librarian is a specialized academic librarian whose primary duties involve serving the information needs of distance education students, faculty, and staff.
Revised:  Distance education librarian or distance learning librarian is a specialized academic librarian whose primary duties involve serving the information needs of distance education students, faculty, and staff.
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Original: A Distance education librarian or distance learning librarian is a specialized academic librarian whose primary duties involve serving the information needs of distance education students, faculty, and staff.
Revised: A distance education librarian or distance learning librarian is a specialized academic librarian whose primary duties involve serving the information needs of distance education students, faculty, and staff.
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Original:  Recognizing that distance education offerings were growing in post-secondary educational institutions, the Association of College and Research Libraries (ACRL) published ‘’ Guidelines for Distance Learning Libraries in 2000 ’’ .Gandhi, Smiti.
Revised:  Recognizing that distance education offerings were growing in post-secondary educational institutions, the Association of College and Research Libraries (ACRL) published " Guidelines for Distance Learning Libraries in 2000 ’’ .Gandhi, Smiti.
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Original:  Recognizing that distance education offerings were growing in post-secondary educational institutions, the Association of College and Research Libraries (ACRL) published ‘’ Guidelines for Distance Learning Libraries in 2000 ’’ .Gandhi, Smiti.
Revised:  Recognizing that distance education offerings were growing in post-secondary educational institutions, the Association of College and Research Libraries (ACRL) published ‘’ Guidelines for Distance Learning Libraries in 2000 " .Gandhi, Smiti.
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Original:  “ Academic Librarianship and Distance Education: Challenges and Opportunities.
Revised:  " Academic Librarianship and Distance Education: Challenges and Opportunities.
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Original:  ” ‘’ Reference & User Services Quarterly ’’ 43.2.
Revised:  " Reference & User Services Quarterly ’’ 43.2.
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Original:  ” ‘’ Reference & User Services Quarterly ’’ 43.2.
Revised:  ” ‘’ Reference & User Services Quarterly 43.2.
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Original:  Web. 16 Jul. 2011 These guidelines asserted that, “ members of the distance learning community are entitled to library resources equivalent to those provided for students and faculty in traditional campus settings".
Revised:  Web. 16 Jul. 2011 These guidelines asserted that, " members of the distance learning community are entitled to library resources equivalent to those provided for students and faculty in traditional campus settings".
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Original:  July 1, 2008, the ACRL Board of Directors approved the ‘’
Revised:  July 1, 2008, the ACRL Board of Directors approved the "
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Original:  Standards for Distance Learning Library Services ’’
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Original:  . The Standards are divided into two parts , Part I Foundations, provides an executive summary of the Access Entitlement Principle, outlines the parameters by which the Standards will serve as a living document, offers definitions of terms associated with both distance education and academic librarianship, and formalizes the Standards ’ philosophy as ‘’
Revised:  . The Standards are divided into two parts . Part I, Foundations, provides an executive summary of the Access Entitlement Principle, outlines the parameters by which the Standards will serve as a living document, offers definitions of terms associated with both distance education and academic librarianship, and formalizes the Standards ’ philosophy as ‘’
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