wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The city's mayor told reporters DeSai "appeared to be a disgruntled lawyer who took out his anger and frustration on individuals . "  One eye witness stated he heard about 50 gunshots spanning a roughly 40-minute time period.
Revised:  The city's mayor told reporters the shooter "appeared to be a disgruntled lawyer who took out his anger and frustration on individuals . " One eye witness stated he heard about 50 gunshots spanning a roughly 40-minute time period.
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Original:  The city's mayor told reporters DeSai "appeared to be a disgruntled lawyer who took out his anger and frustration on individuals . "  One eye witness stated he heard about 50 gunshots spanning a roughly 40-minute time period.
Revised:  The city's mayor told reporters DeSai "appeared to be a disgruntled lawyer who took out his anger and frustration on individuals " One eye witness stated he heard about 50 gunshots spanning a roughly 40-minute time period.
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Original:  One eye witness stated he heard about 50 gunshots  spanning a roughly 40-minute time period.
Revised:  One eye witness stated he heard 50 gunshots spanning a roughly 40-minute time period.
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Original:  One eye witness stated he heard about 50 gunshots  spanning a roughly 40-minute time period.
Revised:  One eye witness stated he heard about 50 gunshots or more spanning a roughly 40-minute time period.
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Original:  The woman described DeSai as "a normal, average Joe . "  Local media report one of the victims has been hospitalized and is listed in critical condition.
Revised:  The woman described DeSai as "a normal, average Joe " Local media report one of the victims has been hospitalized and is listed in critical condition.
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Original:  The woman described DeSai as "a normal, average Joe . "  Local media report one of the victims has been hospitalized and is listed in critical condition.
Revised:  The woman described DeSai as "a normal, average Joe . " . Local media report one of the victims has been hospitalized and is listed in critical condition.
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Original:  Local media report one of the victims has been hospitalized and is listed in critical condition.
Revised:  Local media report one of the victims hospitalized is listed in critical condition.
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Original: Channel Nine in have fired two journalists and a producer for faking two live news crosses to aerial footage above the search site .
Revised: Channel Nine in have fired two journalists and a producer for faking two live news crosses to aerial footage above the site of a search .
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Original:  Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters  which was supposed to be in the air near the search site . Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage.
Revised:  Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters , which was supposed to be in the air near the search site . Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage.
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Original:  Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters  which was supposed to be in the air near the search site . Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage.
Revised:  Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters which was supposed to be in the air near the site of the search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, . Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage.
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Original: Bruce Morcombe, Daniel Morcombe's father, has expressed his sorrow for the sacked journalists and producer.
Revised: Bruce Morcombe, Daniel Morcombe's father, said of his family,
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Original:  "We genuinely see it as a storm in a teacup and feel quite sorry for the loss of those people’s jobs , " he said
Revised:  "We genuinely see it as a storm in a teacup and feel quite sorry for the loss of those people’s jobs " he said
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Original:  "We genuinely see it as a storm in a teacup and feel quite sorry for the loss of those people’s jobs , " he said
Revised:  "We genuinely see it as a storm in a teacup and feel quite sorry for the loss of those people’s jobs , " 
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Original:  Price tweeted to his 1020 followers, "Thanks for all the support .
Revised:  "Thanks for all the support .
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Original:  Price tweeted to his 1020 followers, "Thanks for all the support .
Revised:  Price tweeted to his 1020 followers, "Thanks for all the support ", he tweeted to his followers. "
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Original: Channel Nine in have fired two journalists and a producer for faking two live news crosses to aerial footage above the site of a search.
Revised: Channel Nine in has fired two journalists and a producer for faking two live news crosses to aerial footage above the site of a search.
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Original: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters, which was supposed to be in the air  near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, .  Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage  . Cameron Price is considering legal action against his dismissal.
Revised: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakeley were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters, which was supposed to be in the air near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, . Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage . Cameron Price is considering legal action against his dismissal.
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Original: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters, which was supposed to be in the air  near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, .  Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage  . Cameron Price is considering legal action against his dismissal.
Revised: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad at the time it was supposed to be in the air near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, . Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage . Cameron Price is considering legal action against his dismissal.
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Original: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters, which was supposed to be in the air  near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, .  Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage  . Cameron Price is considering legal action against his dismissal.
Revised: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters, which was supposed to be in the air near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, . Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage came to light . Cameron Price is considering legal action against his dismissal.
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Original: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters, which was supposed to be in the air  near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, .  Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage  . Cameron Price is considering legal action against his dismissal.
Revised: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakely were sacked by the after rival broadcast footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad filming the reporters, which was supposed to be in the air near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, . Channel Nine began an investigation after the footage . Cameron Price said he was considering legal action against his dismissal.
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Original: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakeley were sacked by the after rival leaked to media website Mumbrella footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad at the time it was supposed to be in the air on a live cross near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, . Evidence then emerged that the chopper had not been near the site of the search during a live cross on the previous day too.
Revised: Melissa Mallet and Cameron Price and Producer Aaron Wakeley were sacked by the after rival filmed footage of the Nine News helicopter sitting on the helipad at the time it was supposed to be in the air on a live cross near the site of a search for the remains of a missing schoolboy, . Evidence then emerged that the chopper had not been near the site of the search during a live cross on the previous day too.
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Original:  Bruce Morcombe, Daniel Morcombe's father, said of his family, "We genuinely see it as a storm in a teacup and feel quite sorry for the loss of those people’s jobs"  
Revised:  Bruce Morcombe, Daniel Morcombe's father, said of his family, "We genuinely see it as a storm in a teacup and feel quite sorry for the loss of those people’s jobs" . 
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Original:  Bruce Morcombe, Daniel Morcombe's father, said of his family, "We genuinely see it as a storm in a teacup and feel quite sorry for the loss of those people’s jobs"  
Revised:  Bruce Morcombe, Daniel Morcombe's father, said of his family, "We genuinely see it as a storm in a teacup and feel quite sorry for the loss of those people’s jobs" Related new
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Original: Just two minutes after the second half started , Lima scored an equaliser for Russia.
Revised: Less than two minutes into the second half started , Lima scored an equaliser for Russia.
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Original: Just two minutes after the second half started , Lima scored an equaliser for Russia.
Revised: Just two minutes after the second half , Lima scored an equaliser for Russia.
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Original:  In the dying moments of the game, Constantino Vaporaki scored the fifth goal for Argentina as both the Vaporaki brothers' names were on the score sheet.
Revised:  In the dying moments of the game, Constantino Vaporaki scored the fifth goal for Argentina , putting both the Vaporaki brothers' names were on the score sheet.
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Original:  In the dying moments of the game, Constantino Vaporaki scored the fifth goal for Argentina as both the Vaporaki brothers' names were on the score sheet.
Revised:  In the dying moments of the game, Constantino Vaporaki scored the fifth goal for Argentina as both the Vaporaki brothers' names on the score sheet.
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Original:  Within 30 seconds , Dmitry Lyskov a goal for Russia and Lima scored a penalty , completing his hat-trick, but Argentina win 5–4 at the end of the final time at the stadium in the city of .
Revised:  Within 30 seconds , Dmitry Lyskov a goal for Russia and Lima scored a penalty completing his hat-trick, but Argentina win 5–4 at the end of the final time at the stadium in the city of .
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Original:  Within 30 seconds , Dmitry Lyskov a goal for Russia and Lima scored a penalty , completing his hat-trick, but Argentina win 5–4 at the end of the final time at the stadium in the city of .
Revised:  Within 30 seconds , Dmitry Lyskov a goal for Russia and Lima scored a penalty , completing his hat-trick, but Argentina won 5–4 at the end of the final time at the stadium in the city of .
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Original:  Within 40 seconds Dmitry Lyskov scored a goal for Russia, and in the final minute Lima scored a penalty completing his hat-trick , but Argentina was still ahead and won 5–4 at the end of the final time at the stadium in the city of .
Revised:  Within 40 seconds Dmitry Lyskov scored a goal for Russia, and in the final minute Lima scored a penalty completing his , but Argentina was still ahead and won 5–4 at the end of the final time at the stadium in the city of .
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Original:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit, if this process is not finished within the deadline or member states vote unanimously to extend it  then the UK will be forced to leave the EU  leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
Revised:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit, if this process is not finished within the deadline and member states do not vote unanimously to extend it then the UK will be forced to leave the EU leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
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Original:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit, if this process is not finished within the deadline or member states vote unanimously to extend it  then the UK will be forced to leave the EU  leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
Revised:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit, if this process is not finished within the deadline or member states vote unanimously to extend it , then the UK will be forced to leave the EU leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
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Original:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit, if this process is not finished within the deadline or member states vote unanimously to extend it  then the UK will be forced to leave the EU  leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
Revised:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit, if this process is not finished within the deadline or member states vote unanimously to extend it then the UK will be forced to leave the EU — leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
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Original:  While there have been reports that the French and Itallian governments want article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
Revised:  There have been reports that the French and Itallian governments want article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
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Original:  While there have been reports that the French and Itallian governments want article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
Revised:  While there have been reports the and governments want article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
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Original:  Others however want article 50 to be triggered now ;
Revised:  Others have said they want article 50 to be triggered now ;
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Original:  Others however want article 50 to be triggered now ;
Revised:  Others however want article 50 to be triggered immediately ;
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Original:  in early August a  that called for article 50 to be triggered immediately got 100,000 signatures
Revised:  in early August a petition that called for article 50 to be triggered immediately got 100,000 signatures
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Original: , the prime minister of the United Kingdom , has told the this morning she plans to trigger article 50 by March of next year.
Revised: , the prime minister of the , has told the this morning she plans to trigger article 50 by March of next year.
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Original: , the prime minister of the United Kingdom , has told the this morning she plans to trigger article 50 by March of next year.
Revised: , the prime minister of the United Kingdom , has told the this morning she plans to trigger Article 50 by March of next year.
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Original:  Theresa May MP, Secretary of State for the Home Department is an article in the treaty on the  that sets out the method for withdrawing from the EU.
Revised:  Theresa May MP, Secretary of State for the Home Department is an article in the treaty on the (EU) that sets out the method for withdrawing from the EU.
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Original:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit , if this process is not finished within the deadline and member states do not vote unanimously to extend it, then the UK will be forced to leave the EU — leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
Revised:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit ; if this process is not finished within the deadline and member states do not vote unanimously to extend it, then the UK will be forced to leave the EU — leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
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Original:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit , if this process is not finished within the deadline and member states do not vote unanimously to extend it, then the UK will be forced to leave the EU — leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
Revised:  When triggered it gives the country two years to agree to the the specifics of the exit , if this process is not finished within the deadline and member states do not vote unanimously to extend it, then the UK would be forced to leave the EU — leading to hesitancy in triggering it.
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Original:  Her decision is consistent with what some have asked for. said earlier that , "they need to get on with triggering Article 50 as soon as possible early in the new year."
Revised:  Her decision is consistent with what some have asked for. said earlier , "they need to get on with triggering Article 50 as soon as possible early in the new year."
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Original:  There have been reports the and governments want article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
Revised:  There have been reports the and governments want Article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
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Original:  Others have said they want article 50 to be triggered immediately;
Revised:  Others have said they want Article 50 to be triggered immediately;
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Original: Her decision is consistent with what some have asked for. said earlier, "they need to get on with triggering Article 50 as soon as possible early in the new year . "  There have been reports the and governments want Article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
Revised: Her decision is consistent with what some have asked for. said earlier, "they need to get on with triggering Article 50 as soon as possible early in the new year " There have been reports the and governments want Article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
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Original: Her decision is consistent with what some have asked for. said earlier, "they need to get on with triggering Article 50 as soon as possible early in the new year . "  There have been reports the and governments want Article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
Revised: Her decision is consistent with what some have asked for. said earlier, "they need to get on with triggering Article 50 as soon as possible early in the new year . " . There have been reports the and governments want Article 50 to be triggered as soon as possible.
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Original:  File photo of Yoshinori Osumi, 2015. 71-year-old Yoshinori Ohsumi showed the mechanism of autophagy — a process in which eat parts of themselves and recycle the cell components.
Revised:  File photo of Yoshinori Osumi, 2015. 71-year-old Yoshinori Ohsumi studied mechanisms of autophagy — a process in which eat parts of themselves and recycle the cell components.
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Original: This phenomenon was observed in 1960s after three discovery of , which contains enzymes to digest the cell content.
Revised: This phenomenon was observed in 1960s after the discovery of , which contains enzymes to digest the cell content.
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Original: This phenomenon was observed in 1960s after the discovery of , which contains enzymes to digest the cell content.
Revised: This phenomenon was observed in 1960s with the discovery of , which contains enzymes to digest the cell content.
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Original: This phenomenon was observed in 1960s after the discovery of , which contains enzymes to digest the cell content.
Revised: This phenomenon was observed in 1960s after the discovery of , which contain enzymes to digest the cell content.
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Original: This phenomenon was observed in 1960s after the discovery of , which contains enzymes to digest the cell content.
Revised: This phenomenon was observed in 1960s after the discovery of , which contains enzymes to digest cell content.
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Original:  In 1974 , Belgian scientist was  honoured with the  Nobel Prize in the same category for discovering lysosomes .
Revised:  For that discovery , Belgian scientist was honoured with the Nobel Prize in the same category for discovering lysosomes .
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Original:  In 1974 , Belgian scientist was  honoured with the  Nobel Prize in the same category for discovering lysosomes .
Revised:  In 1974 , Belgian scientist was subsequently honoured with the Nobel Prize in the same category for discovering lysosomes .
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Original:  In 1974 , Belgian scientist was  honoured with the  Nobel Prize in the same category for discovering lysosomes .
Revised:  In 1974 , Belgian scientist was honoured with the Nobel Prize in the same category .
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Original:  Ohsumi conducted a series of experiment on the in 1990s and he identified fifteen genes vital for autophagy.
Revised:  Ohsumi conducted a series of experiments with in 1990s and he identified fifteen genes vital for autophagy.
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Original:  Ohsumi conducted a series of experiment on the in 1990s and he identified fifteen genes vital for autophagy.
Revised:  Ohsumi conducted a series of experiment on the in 1990s and identified fifteen genes vital for autophagy.
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Original:  Ohsumi conducted a series of experiment on the in 1990s and he identified fifteen genes vital for autophagy.
Revised:  Ohsumi conducted a series of experiment on the in 1990s and he identified fifteen genes needed for autophagy.
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Original:  Autophagy is an important phenomenon , which if fails can cause , type 2 and . of those genes can result in .
Revised:  Autophagy is an important phenomenon whose failure through gene mutation may be involved in type 2 and . of those genes can result in .
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Original:  Autophagy is an important phenomenon , which if fails can cause , type 2 and . of those genes can result in .
Revised:  Autophagy is an important phenomenon , which if fails can cause , type 2 , , and neurological disorders such as .
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Original: Ohsumi told Japanese broadcasting company that he was honoured to be recognised by the Nobel committee.
Revised: In remarks to Japanese broadcasting company that he was honoured to be recognised by the Nobel committee.
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Original: Ohsumi told Japanese broadcasting company that he was honoured to be recognised by the Nobel committee.
Revised: Ohsumi told Japanese broadcasting company , Ohsumi said he was honoured to be recognised by the Nobel committee.
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Original: This phenomenon was observed in  1960s with the discovery of , which contain enzymes to digest cell content.
Revised: This phenomenon was observed in the 1960s with the discovery of , which contain enzymes to digest cell content.
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Original:  Ohsumi conducted a series of experiments with in  1990s and identified fifteen genes needed for autophagy.
Revised:  Ohsumi conducted a series of experiments with in the 1990s and identified fifteen genes needed for autophagy.
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