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Original:  Half a dozen police were injured  and two men were taken to hospital - one with a gunshot wound, and another  caught in the blast of an explosion.
Revised:  Half a dozen police were injured , and two men were taken to hospital - one with a gunshot wound, and another caught in the blast of an explosion.
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Original:  Half a dozen police were injured  and two men were taken to hospital - one with a gunshot wound, and another  caught in the blast of an explosion.
Revised:  Half a dozen police were injured and two men were taken to hospital — one with a gunshot wound, and another caught in the blast of an explosion.
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Original:  Half a dozen police were injured  and two men were taken to hospital - one with a gunshot wound, and another  caught in the blast of an explosion.
Revised:  Half a dozen police were injured and two men were taken to hospital - one with a gunshot wound, and another was caught in the blast of an explosion.
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Original: The  route was altered by the Parades Commission due to its intended path through the Nationalist part of the Springfield Road, with the potential to result in rioting and violence (the route would have had to pass through a 30 foot high security barrier, one of the "Peace Lines".
Revised: The parade route was altered by the Parades Commission due to its intended path through the Nationalist part of the Springfield Road, with the potential to result in rioting and violence (the route would have had to pass through a 30 foot high security barrier, one of the "Peace Lines".
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Original: The  route was altered by the Parades Commission due to its intended path through the Nationalist part of the Springfield Road, with the potential to result in rioting and violence (the route would have had to pass through a 30 foot high security barrier, one of the "Peace Lines".
Revised: The route was altered by the Parades Commission due to its intended path through the Nationalist part of Springfield Road, with the potential to result in rioting and violence (the route would have had to pass through a 30 foot high security barrier, one of the "Peace Lines".
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Original:  however, no change to the initial decision was made.
Revised:  however, no change was made.
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Original:  Instead of passing through Springfield Road, the Orange Order parade was required to proceed through the site of  engineering firm Mackies.
Revised:  Instead of passing through Springfield Road, the Orange Order parade was required to proceed through the site of the engineering firm Mackies.
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Original:  The streets in the north and west of Belfast echoed with the sounds of violence that have not been commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles , with petrol, blast and pipe bombs being used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets  by police.
Revised:  The streets of northern and western Belfast echoed with the sounds of violence that have not been commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles , with petrol, blast and pipe bombs being used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets by police.
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Original:  The streets in the north and west of Belfast echoed with the sounds of violence that have not been commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles , with petrol, blast and pipe bombs being used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets  by police.
Revised:  The streets in the north and west of Belfast echoed with sounds of violence that have not been commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles , with petrol, blast and pipe bombs being used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets by police.
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Original:  The streets in the north and west of Belfast echoed with the sounds of violence that have not been commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles , with petrol, blast and pipe bombs being used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets  by police.
Revised:  The streets in the north and west of Belfast echoed with the sounds of violence not commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles , with petrol, blast and pipe bombs being used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets by police.
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Original:  The streets in the north and west of Belfast echoed with the sounds of violence that have not been commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles , with petrol, blast and pipe bombs being used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets  by police.
Revised:  The streets in the north and west of Belfast echoed with the sounds of violence that have not been commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles . Petrol and blast bombs were used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets by police.
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Original:  The streets in the north and west of Belfast echoed with the sounds of violence that have not been commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles , with petrol, blast and pipe bombs being used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets  by police.
Revised:  The streets in the north and west of Belfast echoed with the sounds of violence that have not been commonly heard since the late 1990s and the Troubles , with petrol, blast and pipe bombs being used by rioters, and water cannon and plastic bullets were used by police.
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Original:  Several cars and a bus were hijacked, and roads  closed off by mobs of people.
Revised:  Several cars and a bus were hijacked, and roads were closed off by mobs of people.
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Original:  A number of buildings were set alight  around the outskirts of Belfast .
Revised:  A number of buildings were set alight around the outskirts of the city .
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Original:  There was sidespread stone-throwing, and barricades were erected on some roads that caused traffic disruptions in the city.
Revised:  There was widespread stone-throwing, and barricades were erected on some roads that caused traffic disruptions in the city.
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Original: “ This is a disaster of such scope and such significance that it is not going to go away in a few weeks or a few months, ” said Ken Degnan, a spokesman for the American Red Cross.
Revised:  This is a disaster of such scope and such significance that it is not going to go away in a few weeks or a few months, ” said Ken Degnan, a spokesman for the American Red Cross.
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Original: “ This is a disaster of such scope and such significance that it is not going to go away in a few weeks or a few months, ” said Ken Degnan, a spokesman for the American Red Cross.
Revised: “ This is a disaster of such scope and such significance that it is not going to go away in a few weeks or a few months, said Ken Degnan, a spokesman for the American Red Cross.
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Original:  The organzation is currently sheltering 116,000 victims and has 36,000 volunteers in the field and is currently running 675 shelters across the nation.
Revised:  The organization is currently sheltering 116,000 victims and has 36,000 volunteers in the field and is currently running 675 shelters across the nation.
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Original:  The organzation is currently sheltering 116,000 victims and has 36,000 volunteers in the field and is currently running 675 shelters across the nation.
Revised:  The organzation is currently sheltering 116,000 victims . It has 36,000 volunteers in the field and is currently running 675 shelters across the nation.
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Original:  Anyone who wants to voluenteer is encouraged to go their local Red Cross office, where training will be given to them
Revised:  Anyone who wants to volunteer is encouraged to go their local Red Cross office, where training will be given to them
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Original: What a gift  
Revised: What a gift !" 
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Original: Protests against the detention and deportation of Scott Parkin have taken place outside the Melbourne custody centre today, as well as in Sydney .
Revised: Protests against the detention and deportation of Scott Parkin have taken place outside the Melbourne custody centre today, as well as in Sydney 
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Original:  "I understand it's a decision that's been taken by the Minister for Immigration and that there may be legal proceedings surrounding it." Protestors Mr Parkin attended outside Forbes Global CEO Conference in Sydney Spokesperson for the Brisbane Peace Convergence Kim Stewart said Mr Parkin's detention and deportation posed a "dangerous precedent to free speech in Australia".
Revised:  "I understand it's a decision that's been taken by the Minister for Immigration and that there may be legal proceedings surrounding it." Protests Mr Parkin attended outside Forbes Global CEO Conference in Sydney Spokesperson for the Brisbane Peace Convergence Kim Stewart said Mr Parkin's detention and deportation posed a "dangerous precedent to free speech in Australia".
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Original:  The workshop was sponsored by Forest Action Trust, Pt'chang Nonviolence Training Project, and Friends of the Earth Melbourne   .
Revised:  The workshop was sponsored by Forest Action Trust, Pt'chang Nonviolence Training Project, and Friends of the Earth Melbourne . .
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Original:  Mr Parkin, a native of Houston, Texas, USA, participated in an anti- war-profiteering protest outside Halliburton in Sydney on August 31, and was also reported to have attended the Forbes Global CEO Conference protest.
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Original:  " Protests Mr Parkin attended outside Forbes Global CEO Conference in Sydney Spokesperson for the Brisbane Peace Convergence Kim Stewart said Mr Parkin's detention and deportation posed a "dangerous precedent to free speech in Australia" . "By arresting and threatening to deport Mr Parkin, the government is already using its power to silence non-violent peace campaigners and discourage peaceful dissent in our community," Ms Stewart said.
Revised:  " Protests Mr Parkin attended outside Forbes Global CEO Conference in Sydney Spokesperson for the Brisbane Peace Convergence Kim Stewart said Mr Parkin's detention and deportation posed a "dangerous precedent to free speech in Australia" . 
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Original:  Julian Burnside QC, a prominent human rights lawyer, asked why it took so long for authorities to act if indeed Mr Parkin is a security threat.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "They've got the right but the question is whether that right has been exercised in a way that provides sufficient protection for ordinary citizens of Australia," he said.
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Original:  Greens Senator Bob Brown also criticised the arrest, suggesting that pressure may have been applied by the United States government.
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Original:  "Our fears that these%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Anti-terrorist powers would be used against activists have been justified by yesterday's police action," said Kim Stewart.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% Anti-terrorist powers would be used against activists have been justified by yesterday's police action," said Kim Stewart.
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Original:  "Our fears that these%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Anti-terrorist powers would be used against activists have been justified by yesterday's police action," said Kim Stewart.
Revised:  "Our fears that these%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Anti-terrorist 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Appeal lodged Greenpeace is providing legal help to Mr Parkin and advised that he had instructed his lawyers to appeal to the Migration Review Tribunal to review the basis on which his visa was withdrawn.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Greenpeace is providing legal help to Mr Parkin and advised that he had instructed his lawyers to appeal to the Migration Review Tribunal to review the basis on which his visa was withdrawn.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Appeal lodged Greenpeace is providing legal help to Mr Parkin and advised that he had instructed his lawyers to appeal to the Migration Review Tribunal to review the basis on which his visa was withdrawn.
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Original:  No democratic government should expel a foreign citizen because it%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% opposes his political opinions."
Revised:  No democratic government should expel a foreign citizen because %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% opposes his political opinions."
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Original:  No democratic government should expel a foreign citizen because it%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% opposes his political opinions."
Revised:  No democratic government should expel a foreign citizen because it%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% 
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Original: The company hopes to diversify its profit sources and gain popularity in areas where Skype holds a strong position, such as China, Eastern Europe and Brazil . EBay expects to cut 2006 earnings per share by $0.12 due to the acquisition      . Previous related news EBay may acquire VoIP firm Skyp [       ]  
Revised: The company hopes to diversify its profit sources and gain popularity in areas where Skype holds a strong position, such as China, Eastern Europe and Brazil . EBay expects to cut 2006 earnings per share by $0.12 due to the acquisition . Previous related news EBay may acquire VoIP firm Skyp [ Appeal lodged ] 
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Original: The company hopes to diversify its profit sources and gain popularity in areas where Skype holds a strong position, such as China, Eastern Europe and Brazil . EBay expects to cut 2006 earnings per share by $0.12 due to the acquisition      . Previous related news EBay may acquire VoIP firm Skyp [       ]  
Revised: The company hopes to diversify its profit sources and gain popularity in areas where Skype holds a strong position, such as China, Eastern Europe and Brazil . EBay expects to cut 2006 earnings per share by $0.12 due to the acquisition . Previous related news EBay may acquire VoIP firm Skyp [ it] 
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Original:  Colm Coss, 36, was sentenced to eighteen months in prison after he admitted having breached the Communications Act 2003  
Revised:  Colm Coss, 36, was sentenced to eighteen months in prison after he admitted having breached the Communications Act 2003. 
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Original: Cross targetted a Facebook page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, who was made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a site dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
Revised: Cross targeted a Facebook page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, who was made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a site dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
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Original:  Overseas deceased were also targetted , with Cross trolling tributes to a Canadian murder victim, an Australian road accident fatality and a dead US citizen.
Revised:  Overseas deceased were also targeted , with Cross trolling tributes to a Canadian murder victim, an Australian road accident fatality and a dead US citizen.
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Original:  Although he initially refused to cooperate, Cross later wrote to a police officer and admitted posting the messages, in some of which he said he had had sex with the bodies of the deceased or claimed to have engaged in fictional acts of paedophilia   
Revised:  Although he initially refused to cooperate, Cross later wrote to a police officer and admitted posting the messages, in some of which he said he had had sex with the bodies of the deceased or claimed to have engaged in fictional acts of paedophilia . 
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Original:  Cross targeted a Facebook page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, who was made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a site dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
Revised:  Cross targeted a page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, who was made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a site dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
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Original:  Cross targeted a Facebook page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, who was made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a site dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
Revised:  Cross targeted a Facebook page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, who was made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a page dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
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Original:  Cross targeted a page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, who was made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a page dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
Revised:  Coss targeted a page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, who was made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a page dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
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Original:  Cross was arrested after he sent typed letters to neighbours containing photographs of himself and explaining he was "a troll".
Revised:  Coss was arrested after he sent typed letters to neighbours containing photographs of himself and explaining he was "a troll".
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Original:  Magistrate Pauline Salisbury noted sentencing guidelines of twelve weeks imprisonment, but said the offences were serious enough to warrant 26 weeeks . Eight weeks were shaved off the sentence owing to his guilty plea
Revised:  Magistrate Pauline Salisbury noted sentencing guidelines of twelve weeks imprisonment, but said the offences were serious enough to warrant 26 weeks . Eight weeks were shaved off the sentence owing to his guilty plea
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Original: Manchester Magistrates Court in the UK yesterday jailed a self-described online troll for posting messages to Facebook tribute pages.
Revised: Manchester Magistrates ' court in the UK yesterday jailed a self-described online troll for posting messages to Facebook tribute pages.
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Original:  Colm Coss, 36, was sentenced to eighteen weeks in prison after he admitted having breached the Communications Act  2003.
Revised:  Colm Coss, 36, was sentenced to eighteen weeks in prison after admitting breaching the Communications Act 2003.
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Original:  Colm Coss, 36, was sentenced to eighteen weeks in prison after he admitted having breached the Communications Act  2003.
Revised:  Colm Coss, 36, was sentenced to eighteen weeks in prison after he admitted having breached the Communications Act of 2003.
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Original:  Coss targeted a page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, who was made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a page dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
Revised:  Coss targeted a page in tribute to the late Jade Goody, made famous by reality TV show Big Brother, as well as a page dedicated to young Liverpool dog-attack victim John Paul Massey.
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Original:  "The harm and upset that this can cause is obvious," according to Paul Mitchell, who prosecuted Coss.
Revised:  "The harm and upset that this can cause is obvious," according to Paul Mitchell, prosecuting Coss.
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Original:  Coss was charged with 'sending malicious communications that were grossly offensive' and entered a guilty plea last month.
Revised:  Coss was charged with 'sending malicious communications that were grossly offensive' , entering a guilty plea last month.
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Original:  Yesterday, defence lawyer Leanne Press sought investigation of her client's psychiatric state before sentencing, arguing he "had a history of mental health issues."
Revised:  Yesterday, defence lawyer Leanne Press sought investigation of her client's psychiatric state prior to sentencing, arguing he "had a history of mental health issues."
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Original: The launch of Space Shuttle Discovery on its final mission, STS-133  has been delayed another day.
Revised: The launch of Space Shuttle Discovery on its final mission, STS-133 , has been delayed another day.
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Original:  If the shuttle isn't ready to launch be November 7, the launch will be pushed into December.
Revised:  If the shuttle isn't ready to launch by November 7, the launch will be pushed into December.
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Original: File photo of a Texas family being rescued from flood conditions, 2007 Recently, record breaking rainfall has doled out severe destruction over much of the state of Texas(US).
Revised:  Recently, record breaking rainfall has doled out severe destruction over much of the state of Texas(US).
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Original: Recently, record breaking rainfall has doled out severe destruction over much of the state of Texas (US) . The state's governor called the effects of the storms "absolutely devastating".
Revised: Recently, record breaking rainfall has doled out severe destruction over much of the state of Texas , . The state's governor called the effects of the storms "absolutely devastating".
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Original:  On Sunday alone, over 3 inches of rain fell in the city of Dallas.
Revised:  On Sunday alone, over three inches of rain fell in the city of Dallas.
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Original:  In Hays county , one official described the flooding as, "...the largest flood in the history of this region."
Revised:  In , one official described the flooding as, "...the largest flood in the history of this region."
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Original:  While both Oklahoma and Mexico have seen effects of the storms, the two killed in Texas were a Prom Queen and a 14 year-old boy.
Revised:  While both and have seen effects of the storms, the two killed in Texas were a Prom Queen and a 14 year-old boy.
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Original:  A photo from The Weather Channel showed flooding at The Galleria shopping mall in Houston, prohibiting employees from leaving.
Revised:  A photo from showed flooding at The Galleria shopping mall in Houston, prohibiting employees from leaving.
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Original:  A photo from The Weather Channel showed flooding at The Galleria shopping mall in Houston, prohibiting employees from leaving.
Revised:  A photo from The Weather Channel showed flooding at shopping mall in Houston, prohibiting employees from leaving.
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Original:  In , one official described the flooding as , " ... the largest flood in the history of this region."
Revised:  In , one official described the flooding as " ... the largest flood in the history of this region."
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Original:  In , one official described the flooding as , " ... the largest flood in the history of this region."
Revised:  In , one official described the flooding as , " the largest flood in the history of this region."
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Original:  In , one official described the flooding as "the largest flood in the history of this region . " At least 350 homes there have been destroyed and an additional 1,000 homes suffered damage.
Revised:  In , one official described the flooding as "the largest flood in the history of this region " At least 350 homes there have been destroyed and an additional 1,000 homes suffered damage.
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Original:  In , one official described the flooding as "the largest flood in the history of this region . " At least 350 homes there have been destroyed and an additional 1,000 homes suffered damage.
Revised:  In , one official described the flooding as "the largest flood in the history of this region . " — at least 350 homes there have been destroyed and an additional 1,000 homes suffered damage.
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Original:  In , one official described the flooding as "the largest flood in the history of this region . " At least 350 homes there have been destroyed and an additional 1,000 homes suffered damage.
Revised:  In , one official described the flooding as "the largest flood in the history of this region . " At least 350 homes there were destroyed and an additional 1,000 homes suffered damage.
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