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Original: Traditionally, the position of Secretary-General rotates among the continents suggesting that Annan's successor will likely be an Asian, the first since U Thant filled the post from 1961 to 1971.
Revised: Traditionally, the position of Secretary-General rotates among the continents suggesting that Annan's successor will likely be an Asian, the first since U Thant filled the post from 1961 to 
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Original:  On the NYSE the stock (ticker:PEP) closed at $63.95 up $0.62 per share on the dayof the annoucement.
Revised:  On the NYSE the stock (ticker:PEP) closed at $63.95 up $0.62 per share on the day of the annoucement.
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Original:  Reinemund, 58, said today he 's leaving to spend more time with his family.
Revised:  Reinemund, 58, said he was leaving to spend more time with his family.
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Original:  PepsiCo announced that Indra Nooyi, currently president and CFO, will take over for Reinemund.
Revised:  The same PepsiCo release confirmed that Indra Nooyi, currently president and CFO, will take over for Reinemund.
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Original:  and Hugh Johnston, 44, currently senior vice president of transformation, who was promoted to the newly created post of executive vice president of operations, procurement and information technology.
Revised:  and Hugh Johnston, 44, currently senior vice president of transformation, was promoted to the newly created post of executive vice president of operations, procurement and information technology.
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Original:  Reinemund  will stay with PepsiCo until May, 2007.
Revised:  Reinemund reportedly will stay with PepsiCo until May, 2007.
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Original:  Coca-Cola is still the no . 1 soft-drink maker as a significant portion of PepsiCo's sales come via brands Frito-Lay and Quaker Oats  . Some on Wall Street were suprised by Reinemund's retirement announcement  .
Revised:  Coca-Cola is still the No . 1 soft-drink maker as a significant portion of PepsiCo's sales come via brands Frito-Lay and Quaker Oats . Some on Wall Street were suprised by Reinemund's retirement announcement .
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Original:  Coca-Cola is still the no . 1 soft-drink maker as a significant portion of PepsiCo's sales come via brands Frito-Lay and Quaker Oats  . Some on Wall Street were suprised by Reinemund's retirement announcement  .
Revised:  Coca-Cola is still the no . 1 soft-drink maker as a significant portion of PepsiCo's sales revenue comes from non-drink brands in its Frito-Lay and Quaker Oats . Some on Wall Street were suprised by Reinemund's retirement announcement .
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Original:  On the NYSE the stock (ticker:PEP) closed  at $63.95 up $0.62 per share on the day of the annoucement .
Revised:  On the NYSE the stock (ticker:PEP) closed at $63.95 up $0.62 per share .
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Original: Indra Nooyi PepsiCo Inc. is in line to get its first female chief executive before the end of the year.
Revised:  PepsiCo Inc. is in line to get its first female chief executive before the end of the year.
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Original: It was a drinking binge, that ended with the tree soldiers hitting Louise Jensen with their jeep, while she was riding her motor cycle.
Revised: It was a drinking binge, that ended with the three soldiers hitting Louise Jensen with their jeep, while she was riding her motor cycle.
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Original:  The murder shoked the public, in a time with only little crime, and Allan Ford, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell was convicted to life in prison and discharged from the militairy .
Revised:  The murder shocked the public, in a time with only little crime, and Allan Ford, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell was convicted to life in prison and discharged from the militairy .
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Original:  The murder shoked the public, in a time with only little crime, and Allan Ford, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell was convicted to life in prison and discharged from the militairy .
Revised:  The murder shoked the public, in a time with only little crime, and Allan Ford, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell was convicted to life in prison and discharged from the military .
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Original:  It was a drinking binge, that ended with the three soldiers hitting Louise Jensen with their jeep, while she was riding her motor cycle.
Revised:  It was a drinking binge, the three soldiers hitting Louise Jensen with their jeep, while she was riding her motor cycle.
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Original:  The murder shocked the public , in a time with only little crime, and Allan Ford, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell was convicted to life in prison and discharged from the military.
Revised:  The murder shocked the public of this vacation destination which at the time was not used to serious crimes. Allan Ford, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell was convicted to life in prison and discharged from the military.
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Original:  The murder shocked the public , in a time with only little crime, and Allan Ford, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell was convicted to life in prison and discharged from the military.
Revised:  The murder shocked the public , in a time with only little crime, and Allan Ford, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell were subsequently convicted to life in prison and discharged from the military.
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Original:  However, already in 1998  the sentence was reduced to 25 years after an appeal case , and now, after serving only 12 years , Allan Ford was released .
Revised:  In 1998 the sentence was reduced to 25 years after an appeal case , and now, after serving only 12 years , Allan Ford was released .
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Original:  However, already in 1998  the sentence was reduced to 25 years after an appeal case , and now, after serving only 12 years , Allan Ford was released .
Revised:  However, already in 1998 , the sentence was reduced to 25 years after an appeal case , and now, after serving only 12 years , Allan Ford was released .
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Original:  However, already in 1998  the sentence was reduced to 25 years after an appeal case , and now, after serving only 12 years , Allan Ford was released .
Revised:  However, already in 1998 the sentence was reduced to 25 years after an appeal case . Now, after serving only 12 years , Allan Ford was released .
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Original:  To avoid revival of the lynch atmosphere from 1994,  Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell is first released later this month .
Revised:  To avoid a reprisal of the lynch atmosphere from 1994, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell is first released later this month .
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Original:  To avoid revival of the lynch atmosphere from 1994,  Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell is first released later this month .
Revised:  To avoid revival of the lynch mob atmosphere of 1994, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell is first released later this month .
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Original:  To avoid revival of the lynch atmosphere from 1994,  Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell is first released later this month .
Revised:  To avoid revival of the lynch atmosphere from 1994, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell are scheduled to be released later this month .
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Original:  To avoid revival of the lynch atmosphere from 1994,  Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell is first released later this month .
Revised:  To avoid revival of the lynch atmosphere from 1994, Justin Fowler and Geoff Pernell is first released later this month 
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Original:  They  sexually abused her and killed her with strikes to the head from a spade.
Revised:  They then allegedly sexually abused her and killed her with strikes to the head from a spade.
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Original:  The murder shocked the public of this vacation destination which at the time was not used to serious crimes.
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Original:  To avoid a reoccurrence of the lynch mob atmosphere of 1994, the three will be released seperately.
Revised:  To avoid a public outrage similar to that of 1994, the three will be released seperately.
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Original: Last week, Cypriotic authorities released British soldier Allan Ford realeased from a prison in Cyprus over protests from Danish authorities.
Revised: Last week, Cypriotic authorities released British soldier Allan Ford released from a prison in Cyprus over protests from Danish authorities.
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Original: Last week, Cypriotic authorities released British soldier Allan Ford realeased from a prison in Cyprus over protests from Danish authorities.
Revised: Last week, Cypriotic authorities released British soldier Allan Ford realeased from a prison in Cyprus despite protests from Danish authorities.
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Original:  With their jeep, the soldier struck the pair and abducted Jensen.
Revised:  With their jeep, the soldiers struck the pair and abducted Jensen.
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Original:  They then allegedly sexually abused her and killed her with strikes to the head from a spade.
Revised:  They then sexually abused her and killed her with strikes to the head from a spade.
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Original:  Now, after serving 12 years the Cypriotic authorities have decided to release them for with time off for good behavior and remission.
Revised:  Now, after serving 12 years the Cypriotic authorities have decided to release them with time off for good behavior and remission.
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Original:  He singled out the re-emergence of China as a major factor in the increase in demand, and underinvestment as the  reason that supply cannot be increased rapidly.
Revised:  He singled out the re-emergence of China as a major factor in the increase in demand, and underinvestment as the main reason that supply cannot be increased rapidly.
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Original:  The cost of the eight-year program to convert cars from petrol to LPG, including lost excise revenue, is estimated to be $1.3 billion 
Revised:  The cost of the eight-year program to convert vehicles from petrol to LPG, including lost excise revenue, is estimated to be $1.3 billion 
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Original:  He becomes national co-chair of Rae's campaign as well as his economic advisor. behind the front-runners in the race in terms of raising money and wooing support from senior Liberals  .
Revised:  He fell behind the front-runners in the race in terms of raising money and wooing support from senior Liberals .
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Original:  He becomes national co-chair of Rae's campaign as well as his economic advisor. behind the front-runners in the race in terms of raising money and wooing support from senior Liberals  .
Revised:  He becomes national co-chair of Rae's campaign as well as his economic advisor. behind the front-runners in the race in terms of raising money and wooing support from senior Liberals . He now becomes national co-chair of Rae's campaign as well as his economic advisor .
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Original: “ I'm convinced that Bob Rae is the best person to lead the Liberal Party to victory.
Revised: " I'm convinced that Bob Rae is the best person to lead the Liberal Party to victory.
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Original:  He has the experience and the intelligence and the vision to lead Canada into the 21st century, ” Mr. Belivacqua said at a news conference, Monday.
Revised:  He has the experience and the intelligence and the vision to lead Canada into the 21st century, " Mr. Belivacqua said at a news conference, Monday.
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Original: VICTORIA, Australia - Crime statistics released on Monday by Victoria Police show that Victoria is seeing an increase in fuel theft, much like Sydney has recently  .
Revised:  Crime statistics released on Monday by Victoria Police show that Victoria is seeing an increase in fuel theft, much like Sydney has recently .
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Original: VICTORIA, Australia - Crime statistics released on Monday by Victoria Police show that Victoria is seeing an increase in fuel theft, much like Sydney has recently  .
Revised: VICTORIA, Australia - Crime statistics released on Monday by Victoria Police show that Victoria is seeing an increase in fuel theft, much like Sydney has recently experienced .
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Original:  In the past year, petrol drive-off offences have increased by 41.6\%, from 5,038 in 2004/05 to 7,135 in 2005/06.
Revised:  In the past year, petrol drive-off offences have increased by 41.6\%, from 5,038 in 2004-05 to 7,135 in 2005/06.
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Original:  In the past year, petrol drive-off offences have increased by 41.6\%, from 5,038 in 2004/05 to 7,135 in 2005/06.
Revised:  In the past year, petrol drive-off offences have increased by 41.6\%, from 5,038 in 2004/05 to 7,135 in 2005-06.
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Original:  There has also been a large increase in number plate thefts, 31.9\% in the past year , allowing thieves to conceal their own vehicle registration numbers  . Police Chief Commissioner, Christine Nixon, has said that new initiatives are being introduced to control the growing problem.
Revised:  There has also been a large increase in number plate thefts, 31.9\% in the past year . These thefts allow concealment of vehicle registration numbers . Police Chief Commissioner, Christine Nixon, has said that new initiatives are being introduced to control the growing problem.
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Original:  "In particular we have recently introduced the 'safe plates' initiative which encourages the use of one-way screws on number plates", she said  
Revised:  "In particular we have recently introduced the 'safe plates' initiative which encourages the use of one-way screws on number plates", she said . 
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Original:  "In particular we have recently introduced the 'safe plates' initiative which encourages the use of one-way screws on number plates", she said  
Revised:  "In particular we have recently introduced the 'safe plates' initiative which encourages the use of one-way screws on number plates", she said Reference
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Original:  It has 778,000km on it, yet it looks as crisp today as it did when it was born," the pilot desribed on TradeMe.
Revised:  It has 778,000km on it, yet it looks as crisp today as it did when it was born," the pilot described on TradeMe.
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Original:  One bidder had offered $40 if he sold the uniform immediatly but that offer was turned down in order to see the auction go until Sunday.
Revised:  One bidder had offered $40 if he sold the uniform immediately but that offer was turned down in order to see the auction go until Sunday.
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Original: The auction is closing on August 20, Sunday .
Revised: The auction is closing on August 20, Sunday 
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Original: The New Zealand Maori Queen, Te Arikinui Dame Te Atairangikaahu has just died after a long illness at 75-years-old at 5.32 p.m. (NZST) today.
Revised: The New Zealand Māori Queen, Te Arikinui Dame Te Atairangikaahu has just died after a long illness at 75-years-old at 5.32 p.m. (NZST) today.
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Original:  The Maori Queen holds no constitutional function in New Zealand, but Dame Te Atairangikaahu was an avid supporter of cultural and sporting events;
Revised:  The Māori Queen holds no constitutional function in New Zealand, but Dame Te Atairangikaahu was an avid supporter of cultural and sporting events;
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Original:  She was 75-years-old .
Revised:  She was 75 years old .
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Original:  Dame Te Ata received dialysis treatment three times a week , and had been in hospital several times in the past year.
Revised:  Dame Te Ata received dialysis treatment three times a week and had been in hospital several times in the past year.
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Original: CANBERRA, Australia - Solar Systems Pty Ltd, Hawthorn, Victoria, have announced an agreement with Boeing Australia Ltd for supply of Spectrolab solar cells.
Revised:  Solar Systems Pty Ltd, Hawthorn, Victoria, have announced an agreement with Boeing Australia Ltd for supply of Spectrolab solar cells.
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Original:  The solar cells are up to three times more efficient than the cells used in typical domestic solar panels, enabling Solar Systems to increase the output of their dish systems.
Revised:  The solar cells are three times more efficient than the cells used in typical domestic solar panels, enabling Solar Systems to increase the output of their dish systems.
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Original: Lebanon's defence minister, w: Elias Murr, says that the 15,000 troops Lebanon has committed to the peacekeeping operation will be on the north side of the Litani River by the end of the week.
Revised: Lebanon's defence minister, Elias Murr, says that the 15,000 troops Lebanon has committed to the peacekeeping operation will be on the north side of the Litani River by the end of the week.
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Original: The United Nations brokered cease-fire between Israel and Hezbollah is taking hold as Israel has begun to slowly withdraw its forces from Lebanon.
Revised: The United Nations brokered cease-fire between Israel and Hezbollah is taking hold as Israel has begun to withdraw its forces from Lebanon.
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Original: The United Nations brokered cease-fire between Israel and Hezbollah is taking hold as Israel has begun to withdraw its forces from Lebanon.
Revised: The United Nations brokered cease-fire between Israel and Hezbollah is largely holding as Israel has begun to withdraw its forces from Lebanon.
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Original:   Resolution 1701 calling for a "full cessation of hostilities" in the Israeli-Lebanon war  passed by the UN Security Council last Friday and was approved by Lebanon and Israel over the weekend.
Revised:  UNSC Resolution 1701 calling for a "full cessation of hostilities" in the Israeli-Lebanon war passed by the UN Security Council last Friday and was approved by Lebanon and Israel over the weekend.
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Original:   Resolution 1701 calling for a "full cessation of hostilities" in the Israeli-Lebanon war  passed by the UN Security Council last Friday and was approved by Lebanon and Israel over the weekend.
Revised:  Resolution 1701 , which calls for a "full cessation of hostilities" in the Israeli-Lebanon war passed by the UN Security Council last Friday and was approved by Lebanon and Israel over the weekend.
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Original:   Resolution 1701 calling for a "full cessation of hostilities" in the Israeli-Lebanon war  passed by the UN Security Council last Friday and was approved by Lebanon and Israel over the weekend.
Revised:  Resolution 1701 calling for a "full cessation of hostilities" in the Israeli-Lebanon war , was passed by the UN Security Council last Friday and was approved by Lebanon and Israel over the weekend.
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Original:  Hezbollah, which has vowed to continue to harass Israeli troops as long as they remain fired ten rockets in southern Lebanonlast night but none of them crossed the border into Israel.
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Original:  As part of the truce agreement, they must cross the river and exercise control over what has been Hezbollah run terriotory in southern Lebanon.
Revised:  As part of the truce agreement, they must cross the river and exercise control over what has been Hezbollah controlled territory in southern Lebanon.
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Original:  The  Israeli army says it intends to complete its withdrawal from Lebanon by the end of this week   
Revised:  The head of the Israeli army says it intends to complete its withdrawal from Lebanon by the end of this week 
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Original:  Israel says it killed 530 Hizbollah fighters while Hezbollah puts the toll at about 80.
Revised:  Israel says it killed 530 Hezbollahh fighters while Hezbollah puts the toll at about 80.
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Original: The Marussia F1 team's test driver, Spaniard Maria de Villota , was taken to hospital by air ambulance today after a collision in testing at Duxford Airfield .
Revised: The team's test driver, Spaniard Maria de Villota , was taken to hospital by air ambulance today after a collision in testing at Duxford Airfield .
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Original: The Marussia F1 team's test driver, Spaniard Maria de Villota , was taken to hospital by air ambulance today after a collision in testing at Duxford Airfield .
Revised: The Marussia F1 team's test driver, , was taken to hospital by air ambulance today after a collision in testing at Duxford Airfield .
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Original: The Marussia F1 team's test driver, Spaniard Maria de Villota , was taken to hospital by air ambulance today after a collision in testing at Duxford Airfield .
Revised: The Marussia F1 team's test driver, Spaniard Maria de Villota , was taken to hospital by air ambulance today after a collision in testing at .
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Original:  A spokesman for the East of England ambulance service, Gary Sanderson  said de Villota had " ... . sustained life-threatening injuries and following treatment at the scene by paramedics, she has been taken to Addenbrookes Hospital for further care."
Revised:  A spokesman for the East of England ambulance service, Gary Sanderson , said de Villota had " ... . sustained life-threatening injuries and following treatment at the scene by paramedics, she has been taken to Addenbrookes Hospital for further care."
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Original:  A spokesman for the East of England ambulance service, Gary Sanderson  said de Villota had " ... . sustained life-threatening injuries and following treatment at the scene by paramedics, she has been taken to Addenbrookes Hospital for further care."
Revised:  A spokesman for the East of England ambulance service, Gary Sanderson said de Villota had " ... sustained life-threatening injuries and following treatment at the scene by paramedics, she has been taken to Addenbrookes Hospital for further care."
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Original:  According to witnesses, she was motionless for about 15 minutes as medical teams attended  her, but did move her hands before being taken away from the test track.
Revised:  According to witnesses, she was motionless for about fifteen minutes as medical teams attended her, but did move her hands before being taken away from the test track.
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Original:  According to witnesses, she was motionless for about 15 minutes as medical teams attended  her, but did move her hands before being taken away from the test track.
Revised:  According to witnesses, she was motionless for about 15 minutes as medical teams attended to her, but did move her hands before being taken away from the test track.
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Original:  Medical charity Magpas , whose volunteer paramedics attended the accident, reported that she had sustained injuries to her head and face, and was in a 'stable condition' when she reached the hospital.
Revised:  Medical charity , whose volunteer paramedics attended the accident, reported that she had sustained injuries to her head and face, and was in a 'stable condition' when she reached the hospital.
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Original:  Medical charity Magpas , whose volunteer paramedics attended the accident, reported that she had sustained injuries to her head and face, and was in a 'stable condition' when she reached the hospital.
Revised:  Medical charity Magpas , whose volunteer paramedics attended the accident, reported she had sustained injuries to her head and face, and was in a 'stable condition' when she reached the hospital.
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Original:  De Villota was announced as Marussia's test driver in March, and has had prior experience driving with Alan Docking Racing in Superleague Formula in Spain
Revised:  De Villota was announced as Marussia's test driver in March, having prior experience driving with Alan Docking Racing in Superleague Formula in Spain
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Original:  De Villota was announced as Marussia's test driver in March, and has had prior experience driving with Alan Docking Racing in Superleague Formula in Spain
Revised:  De Villota was announced as Marussia's test driver in March, and has had prior experience driving for in in Spain
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