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Original: Hurricane Jimena, a powerful Category 3 hurricane, is currently closing in on Mexico's Baja California peninsula.
Revised: Hurricane Jimena, a powerful Category 3 hurricane, is currently closing in on Mexico's peninsula.
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Original:  Jimena is situated about 110 mi (175 km) southwest of Cabo San Lucas .
Revised:  Jimena is situated about 110 mi (175 km) southwest of .
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Original:  The state of Baja California Sur and Socorro Island have been placed on orange alert, the second-highest.
Revised:  The state of and Socorro Island have been placed on orange alert, the second-highest.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Tropical Storm Erika – the fifth named cyclone of the 2009 Atlantic season – has formed in the Atlantic Ocean , and might threaten the United States next week
Revised:  Meanwhile, Tropical Storm Erika – the fifth named cyclone of the 2009 Atlantic season – has formed in the , and might threaten the United States next week
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Original: Hurricane Jimena, a powerful Category 3 hurricane, is currently closing in on Mexico's peninsula . Some areas of the region are already beginning to experience the storm's effects.
Revised: Hurricane Jimena, a powerful Category 3 hurricane, is currently closing in on Mexico's . Some areas of the region are already beginning to experience the storm's effects.
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Original:  Audel Alvarez, the head of training for civil protection in the state of Baja California Sur , said, "The whole state is vulnerable."
Revised:  Audel Alvarez, the head of training for civil protection in the state of , said, "The whole state is vulnerable."
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Original: Wildfires in central California continued to spread across southern California on Tuesday, having burned more than 122,000 acres of land throughout the state and caused an estimated US$13 million worth of damage.
Revised: Wildfires in California continued to spread across southern California on Tuesday, having burned more than 122,000 acres of land throughout the state and caused an estimated US$13 million worth of damage.
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Original: Wildfires in central California continued to spread across southern California on Tuesday, having burned more than 122,000 acres of land throughout the state and caused an estimated US$13 million worth of damage.
Revised: Wildfires in central California continued to spread across on Tuesday, having burned more than 122,000 acres of land throughout the state and caused an estimated US$13 million worth of damage.
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Original:  3,600 personnel are involved in containing the widfire . Currently, only five percent of the blaze is contained, but forest offical Mike Dietrich said that the number would likely rise soon.
Revised:  3,600 personnel are involved in containing the wildfire . Currently, only five percent of the blaze is contained, but forest offical Mike Dietrich said that the number would likely rise soon.
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Original:  3,600 personnel are involved in containing the widfire . Currently, only five percent of the blaze is contained, but forest offical Mike Dietrich said that the number would likely rise soon.
Revised:  3,600 personnel are involved in containing the widfire . Currently, only five percent of the blaze is contained, but forest official Mike Dietrich said that the number would likely rise soon.
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Original: Moe defeated Maffra in the Qualifying Final to qualify for the Second Semi Final The West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Semi Finals will be played this weekend at the Moe and Sale Recreation Reserves.
Revised: Moe defeated Maffra in the Qualifying Final to qualify for the Second Semi Final The West Gippsland Latrobe Football League (WGLFL) Semi Finals were played this weekend at the Moe and Sale Recreation Reserves.
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Original:  Moe will play Traralgon in the Second Semi Final in Sale after beating Maffra in the Qualifying Final.
Revised:  Moe lost to Traralgon in the Second Semi Final in Sale after beating Maffra in the Qualifying Final.
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Original:  Maffra will play Leongatha in the First Semi Final in Moe after losing the Qualifying Final against Moe.
Revised:  Maffra thumped Leongatha in the First Semi Final in Moe after losing the Qualifying Final against Moe.
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Original: Moe lost to Traralgon in the Second Semi Final in Sale after beating Maffra in the Qualifying Final.
Revised: Moe lost to Traralgon in the major Semi Final in Sale after beating Maffra in the Qualifying Final.
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Original:  Maffra thumped Leongatha in the First Semi Final in Moe after losing the Qualifying Final against Moe.
Revised:  Maffra thumped Leongatha in the minor Semi Final in Moe after losing the Qualifying Final against Moe.
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Original:  __NOTOC__ First Semi Final Second Semi Final
Revised:  __NOTOC__ First Semi Final Major Semi Final
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Original:  Matthew Swift, 18, and Ross McKnight, 16, were both  planning to blow up Audenshaw High School in Denton, Greater Manchester on April 20th this year - the tenth anniversary of a killing spree that took place in a high school in Columbine, in the US state of Colorado.
Revised:  Matthew Swift, 18, and Ross McKnight, 16, were both thought to be planning to blow up Audenshaw High School in Denton, Greater Manchester on April 20th this year - the tenth anniversary of a killing spree that took place in a high school in Columbine, in the US state of Colorado.
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Original:  The two students also planned to blow up Crown Point North shopping complex in Manchester as well.
Revised:  It is also thought that the two students could have planned to blow up Crown Point North shopping complex in Manchester as well.
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Original:  Another one of their influences was the Oklahoma City bombings in Oklahoma, which was caused by Timothy McVeigh on April 19th 1995.
Revised:  Believed to be another one of their influences was the Oklahoma City bombings in Oklahoma, which was caused by Timothy McVeigh on April 19th 1995.
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Original: Two teenage boys were thought to be planning to blow up a school in Greater Manchester, England to coincide with the 10th anniversary of a massacre that took place in a school in Columbine, Colorado, US.
Revised: Two teenage boys were thought to be planning to blow up a school in Greater Manchester, England to coincide with the tenth anniversary of a massacre that took place in a school in Columbine, Colorado, US.
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Original:  The statement was told to Manchester Crown Court today, as the trial was proceeding.
Revised:  The statement was given to Manchester Crown Court today, as the trial was proceeding.
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Original: On April 20th 1999, two high school students known by the names of Dylan Klebold and Eric Harris killed 12 students and a teacher and injured 21 other people before turning their weapons on themselves and committing suicide.
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Original:  However, the government in Azerbaijanwere not amused.
Revised:  However, Azerbaijan's government was not amused.
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Original:  But Isakhan Ashurov, the lawyer of the two criminals insists that the arrests were politically motivated.
Revised:  But Isakhan Ashurov, the lawyer of the two 'criminals' insists that the arrests were politically motivated.
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Original:  He said: “ This incident is definitely politically motivated.
Revised:  " This incident is definitely politically motivated.
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Original:  Quite the opposite .
Revised:  Quite the opposite ," stated Ashurov
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Original: Two Internet bloggers from Azerbaijan could be getting up to five years in prison after posting a video of a donkey giving a press conference on Internet video website YouTube .
Revised: Two Internet bloggers from Azerbaijan could be getting up to five years in prison after posting a video of a donkey giving a press conference on YouTube, a free video sharing website .
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Original:  The video depicts a man dressed in a donkey costume extolling the benefits of living in Azerbaijan and praising the government for its positive attitude towards donkeys.
Revised:  The video depicts a man dressed in a donkey costume praising the benefits of living in Azerbaijan and praising the government for its positive attitude towards donkeys.
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Original:  The video depicts a man dressed in a donkey costume extolling the benefits of living in Azerbaijan and praising the government for its positive attitude towards donkeys.
Revised:  The video depicts a man dressed in a donkey costume extolling the benefits of living in Azerbaijan . It was also praising the positive attitude the country's government has towards its donkeys.
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Original:  The authorities insist they are investigating a simple criminal case, but Isakhan Ashurov, the lawyer of the two 'criminals' insists that the arrests were politically motivated.
Revised:  The authorities insist they are investigating a simple criminal case, but Isakhan Ashurov, the lawyer of the two 'criminals' claims that the arrests were politically motivated.
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Original: The cooperation between KDE group and Wikimedia Foundation was announced a couple of days ago on LinuxTag Conference in Frankfurt.
Revised: The cooperation between KDE group and Wikimedia Foundation was recently announced at the LinuxTag Conference in Frankfurt.
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Original:  They intend to build a protocol which will make it possible to access Wikimedia project's data from any application, especially from KDE suite.
Revised:  They intend to build a protocol which will make it possible to access Wikimedia project's data from any application, but especially from the KDE suite.
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Original:   KDE Group will try to integrate some of applications from the package with Wikimedia data.
Revised:  The KDE Group will try to integrate some of applications from the package with Wikimedia data.
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Original:  For example, AmaroK, media player, will use Wikipedia data to show informations about music played at the moment.
Revised:  For example, AmaroK, media player, will use Wikipedia data to show information about music being played at the moment.
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Original:  Some other applications, including chemical database Kalzium, a database of information about the sky KStars and office suite KOffice will use the data from Wikipedia, or from its sister projects.
Revised:  Some other applications, including chemical database Kalzium, a database of information about the sky KStars and office suite KOffice will use data from Wikipedia, or from its sister projects.
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Original:  It will be based on SOAP/WSDL technology, which is already used by  Google API.
Revised:  It will be based on SOAP/WSDL technology, which is already used by the Google API.
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Original:  It might be used on almost every platform and programming environment.
Revised:  It could be used on almost every platform and programming environment.
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Original:  It is also possible to include  Wikipedia archive in some of KDE's CD editions to make it possible to use the data from Wikipedia on machines without  internet connection
Revised:  It is also possible to include the Wikipedia archive in some of KDE's CD editions to make it possible to use the data from Wikipedia on machines without internet connection
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Original:  It is also possible to include  Wikipedia archive in some of KDE's CD editions to make it possible to use the data from Wikipedia on machines without  internet connection
Revised:  It is also possible to include Wikipedia archive in some of KDE's CD editions to make it possible to use the data from Wikipedia on machines without an internet connection
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Original:  Some other applications, including chemical database Kalzium (penis penis penis) , a database of information about the sky KStars and office suite KOffice will use data from Wikipedia, or from its sister projects.
Revised:  Some other applications, including chemical database Kalzium , a database of information about the sky KStars and office suite KOffice will use data from Wikipedia, or from its sister projects.
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Original: A co-operation between the KDE group - makers of a free desktop for Linux - and the Wikimedia Foundation was recently announced at the LinuxTag Conference in Karlsruhe.
Revised: A co-operation between the KDE group - makers of a free desktop for Linux - and the Wikimedia Foundation has been announced at the LinuxTag Conference in Karlsruhe.
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Original: The KDE Group will try to integrate some of  applications from the package with Wikimedia data.
Revised: The KDE Group will try to integrate some of the applications from the package with Wikimedia data.
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Original: An appeal has been broadcast on national television program on the BBC One show Crimewatch.
Revised: An appeal has been broadcast on national television on the BBC One show Crimewatch.
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Original:  Seventeen year old Melanie Road was murdered on the early hours of June 9th, 1984 in Bath.
Revised:  Seventeen year old Melanie Road was murdered in the early hours of June 9th, 1984 in Bath.
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Original:  The team responsible for investiagting the murder is the Avon and Somerset Major Crime Review Team.
Revised:  The team responsible for investigating the murder is the Avon and Somerset Major Crime Review Team.
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Original:  90 arrests had been made in connection with the murder but no one has been convicted.
Revised:  90 arrests have been made in connection with the murder but no one has been convicted.
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Original:  Original anchor Nick Ross left the show after 23 years  in 2007.
Revised:  Original anchor Nick Ross left the show after 23 years , in 2007.
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Original:  The show has featured cases such as the murder of Holly Wells and Jessica Chapman, Sarah Payne and former Crimewatch presenter Jill Dando which has been unsolved since Barry George had released
Revised:  The show has featured cases such as the murder of Holly Wells and Jessica Chapman, Sarah Payne and former Crimewatch presenter Jill Dando which has been unsolved since Barry George was released
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Original:  Seventeen year old Melanie Road was murdered in the early hours of June 9th, 1984 in Bath.
Revised:  Seventeen-year-old Melanie Road was murdered in the early hours of June 9th, 1984 in Bath.
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Original: Image:Nick Ross.jpg|Former Crimewatch presenter Nick Ross An appeal for information on a 25-year-old murder case has been broadcast on national television on the BBC One show Crimewatch.
Revised:  An appeal for information on a 25-year-old murder case has been broadcast on national television on the BBC One show Crimewatch.
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Original:  According to Iinuma, ground crews are continuing to maintain the fires perimeter, which remained unchanged from Tuesday.
Revised:  According to Iinuma, ground crews are continuing to maintain the fire's perimeter, which remained unchanged from Tuesday.
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Original:  Aiona's observations are mirrored by a local business owners own story.
Revised:  Aiona's observations are mirrored by a local business owners story.
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Original:  In Kapaakea a family owned beehive was burned to ash, but residents admit that the beehives were the last things on there mind .
Revised:  In Kapaakea a family owned beehive was burned to ash, but residents admit that the beehives were not their main concern .
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Original: File:Felipe Calderon 20090130.jpg|Mexican President Felipe Calderon Seventeen people have been killed after gunmen stormed a drug rehab centre in the city of Ciudad Juarez on the US-Mexico border.
Revised:  Seventeen people have been killed after gunmen stormed a drug rehab centre in the city of Ciudad Juarez on the US-Mexico border.
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Original: Seventeen people have been killed after gunmen stormed a drug rehab centre in the city of Ciudad Juarez on the US-Mexico border.
Revised: Seventeen people have been killed after gunmen stormed a drug rehab centre in the city of Ciudad Juarez on the United States-Mexico border.
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Original:   President Felipe Calderon has fought during Presidency to fight the cartels.
Revised:  Mexican President Felipe Calderon has fought during Presidency to fight the cartels.
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Original:   President Felipe Calderon has fought during Presidency to fight the cartels.
Revised:  President Felipe Calderon has fought to bring an end to the cartels.
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Original:  Two cars intercepted his vehicle as he was just blocks from the police headquarters.
Revised:  Two cars intercepted his vehicle just blocks from the police headquarters.
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Original:  Revuelta had only been appointed to the role two weeks ago
Revised:  Revuelta had only been appointed to the position two weeks ago
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Original: Drug rehab centres have been targeted before in Ciudad Juarez as dealers have been accused of using the centres for protection from rival gangs .
Revised: This is not the first time drug rehab centres have been targeted before in Ciudad Juarez as dealers have been accused of using the centres for protection from rival gangs .
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Original: Drug rehab centres have been targeted before in Ciudad Juarez as dealers have been accused of using the centres for protection from rival gangs .
Revised: Drug rehab centres have been targeted before in Ciudad Juarez . In the past, dealers have been accused of using the centres for protection from rival gangs .
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Original: Drug rehab centres have been targeted before in Ciudad Juarez as dealers have been accused of using the centres for protection from rival gangs .
Revised: Drug rehab centres have been targeted before in Ciudad Juarez as dealers have been accused of using the centres to protect their members from rival cartels .
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Original:  Mexican President Felipe Calderon has fought to bring an end to the cartels.
Revised:  Mexican President has fought to bring an end to the cartels.
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Original:  In a separate attack deputy police chief Jose Manuel Revuelta was murdered by several heavily armed men as he was driving in Morelia .
Revised:  In a separate attack deputy police chief Jose Manuel Revuelta was murdered by several heavily armed men as he was driving in .
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Original:    “Our State League has the reputation as being the best competition outside the AFL, now footy fans across Australia can see for themselves,” AFL Vctoria CEO Peter Schwab said.
Revised:  “Our State League has the reputation as being the best competition outside the AFL, now footy fans across Australia can see for themselves,” Mr Schwab said.
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Original: Official US government data revealed on Friday that the jobless rate in the US rose to 9.7\% last month, with the economy having shed 216,000 jobs.
Revised: Official United States government data revealed on Friday that the jobless rate in the US rose to 9.7\% last month, with the economy having shed 216,000 jobs.
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Original: England author and playwright Keith Waterhouse has died at the age of 80.
Revised: English author and playwright Keith Waterhouse has died at the age of 80.
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Original:  His family issued out a statement on Friday morning saying : "Keith Waterhouse, aged 80, died quietly in his sleep this morning."
Revised:  His family issued a statement on Friday morning saying : "Keith Waterhouse, aged 80, died quietly in his sleep this morning."
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Original:  His family issued out a statement on Friday morning saying : "Keith Waterhouse, aged 80, died quietly in his sleep this morning."
Revised:  His family issued out a statement on Friday morning saying , "Keith Waterhouse, aged 80, died quietly in his sleep this morning."
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Original:  The spokesperson for his family had said that he "had not been very well" recently but refused to give out details of the nature of his illness.
Revised:  The spokesperson for his family said that he "had not been very well" recently but refused to give out details of the nature of his illness.
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Original:  He is best known for being the writing the best-selling novel Billy Liar in 1959 - a book that was later turned into a film  starring Tom Courtenay in 1963.
Revised:  He is best known for writing the best-selling novel Billy Liar in 1959 - a book that was later turned into a film starring Tom Courtenay in 1963.
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Original:  He is best known for being the writing the best-selling novel Billy Liar in 1959 - a book that was later turned into a film  starring Tom Courtenay in 1963.
Revised:  He is best known for being the writing the best-selling novel Billy Liar in 1959 - a book that was later turned into a film in 1963 starring Tom Courtenay in 1963.
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Original:  Some of his best plays included Mrs Nobody and  1989 London West-End hit, Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell.
Revised:  Some of his well known plays included Mrs Nobody and 1989 London West-End hit, Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell.
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Original:  Some of his best plays included Mrs Nobody and  1989 London West-End hit, Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell.
Revised:  Some of his best plays included Mrs Nobody and the 1989 London West-End hit, Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell.
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Original:  Some of his best plays included Mrs Nobody and  1989 London West-End hit, Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell.
Revised:  Some of his best plays included Mrs Nobody and 1989 West-End hit, Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell.
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Original:  As well as that, Waterhouse was a column writer for  British tabloid newspaper, the Daily Mail until May 2009, when health problems forced him to stop .
Revised:  Waterhouse was also a column writer for British tabloid newspaper, the Daily Mail until May 2009, when health problems forced him to stop .
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Original:  As well as that, Waterhouse was a column writer for  British tabloid newspaper, the Daily Mail until May 2009, when health problems forced him to stop .
Revised:  As well as that, Waterhouse was a column writer for the British tabloid newspaper, the Daily Mail until May 2009, when health problems forced him to stop .
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Original:  As well as that, Waterhouse was a column writer for  British tabloid newspaper, the Daily Mail until May 2009, when health problems forced him to stop .
Revised:  As well as that, Waterhouse was a column writer for British tabloid newspaper, the Daily Mail until May 2009, when health problems forced him to quit .
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Original:  When talking about the late writer's last column in the newspaper, Daily Mail writer Geoffrey Levy said : "Thanks for every word, Keith.
Revised:  When talking about the late writer's last column in the newspaper, Daily Mail writer Geoffrey Levy said , "Thanks for every word, Keith.
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Original:  Some of his well known plays included Mrs Nobody and the 1989 West-End hit, Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell  .
Revised:  Some of his well known plays included Mrs Nobody and Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell .
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Original:  The spokesperson for his family said that he "had not been very well  " recently but refused to give out details of the nature of his illness .
Revised:  The spokesperson for his family said that he "had not been very well , " recently but refused to give out details of the nature of his illness .
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