wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  First round of the 2005 European BMX Championships held in Sainte Maxime , France, on 23 April 2005 [[File:BMX Cykelbana - Ystad-2016.jpg|upright=1.35|Building of a BMX track in 2016 in Ystad, Sweden]] BMX, an abbreviation for bicycle motocross or bike motocross, is a cycle sport performed on BMX bikes, either in competitive BMX racing or freestyle BMX, or else in general on- or off-road recreation.
Revised:  First round of the 2005 European BMX Championships held in Sainte-Maxime , France, on 23 April 2005 [[File:BMX Cykelbana - Ystad-2016.jpg|upright=1.35|Building of a BMX track in 2016 in Ystad, Sweden]] BMX, an abbreviation for bicycle motocross or bike motocross, is a cycle sport performed on BMX bikes, either in competitive BMX racing or freestyle BMX, or else in general on- or off-road recreation.
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Original:  His style of using the guitar like a sitar drew him attention from the press.
Revised:  His style of using the guitar like a sitar drew him attention from the URL
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Original:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarl from Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Revised:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following URL Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarl from Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
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Original:  His performances use folk instruments like 'Sindhi banjo', dholak and tabla as well as drums and both electric and acoustic guitars – all of which move effortlessly from Indian raag to Western Jazz . He says about his new genre, "I want to create a bridge between jazz and classical.
Revised:  His performances use folk instruments like 'Sindhi banjo', dholak and tabla as well as drums and both electric and acoustic guitars – all of which move effortlessly from Indian raag to Western jazz . He says about his new genre, "I want to create a bridge between jazz and classical.
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Original:  It shows that if classical music is made contemporary and played well, people will listen.     
Revised:  It shows that if classical music is made contemporary and played well, people will listen. References 
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Original: Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a No 1 Jazzical/ Original guitarist of Pakistan . Early Life Born in Karachi, Sinan started playing guitar at the age of 13 under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
Revised: Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a No 1 Jazzical/ Original guitarist of Pakistan . Early life Born in Karachi, Sinan started playing guitar at the age of 13 under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
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Original:  His style of using the guitar like a sitar drew him attention from the URL Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following URL Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarl from Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA He says about his new genre, "I want to create a bridge between jazz and classical.
Revised:  His style of using the guitar like a sitar drew him attention from the press. Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following URL Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarl from Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA He says about his new genre, "I want to create a bridge between jazz and classical.
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Original:  His style of using the guitar like a sitar drew him attention from the URL Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following URL Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarl from Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA He says about his new genre, "I want to create a bridge between jazz and classical.
Revised:  His style of using the guitar like a sitar drew him attention from the URL Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarl from Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA He says about his new genre, "I want to create a bridge between jazz and classical.
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Original:  It shows that if classical music is made contemporary and played well, people will URL
Revised:  It shows that if classical music is made contemporary and played well, people will listen."
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Original:  Many international artists from Germany, USA and India have chose to work with Asif Sinan because of his understanding of both Eastern and Western music.
Revised:  Many international artists from Germany, USA and India have chosen to work with Asif Sinan because of his understanding of both Eastern and Western music.
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Original:  In October 2013, Sinan was chosen as one of  10 global artists as a MOCAFellow – an initiative of the World Islamic Economic Forum.
Revised:  In October 2013, Sinan was chosen as one of the 10 global artists as a MOCAFellow – an initiative of the World Islamic Economic Forum.
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Original: Multiple issues| Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a number 1 Pakistani Indian classical music and jazzguitarist and and well known singer . Early life  Born in Karachi, Sinan started playing guitar at the age of 13  under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
Revised:  Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a number 1 Pakistani Indian classical music and jazzguitarist and and well known singer . Early life Born in Karachi, Sinan started playing guitar at the age of 13 under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
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Original: Multiple issues| Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a number 1 Pakistani Indian classical music and jazzguitarist and and well known singer . Early life  Born in Karachi, Sinan started playing guitar at the age of 13  under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
Revised: Multiple issues| Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a number 1 Pakistani Indian classical music and jazzguitarist and and well known singer . Early life Born in Karachi, Sinan began playing guitar at the age of 13 under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
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Original: Multiple issues| Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a number 1 Pakistani Indian classical music and jazzguitarist and and well known singer . Early life  Born in Karachi, Sinan started playing guitar at the age of 13  under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
Revised: Multiple issues| Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a number 1 Pakistani Indian classical music and jazzguitarist and and well known singer . Early life Born in Karachi, Sinan started playing guitar at age 13 under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Multiple issues| Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a number 1 Pakistani Indian classical music and jazzguitarist and and well known singer . Early life  Born in Karachi, Sinan started playing guitar at the age of 13  under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
Revised: Multiple issues| Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a number 1 Pakistani Indian classical music and jazzguitarist and and well known singer . Early life Born in Karachi, Sinan started playing guitar at the age of 13 , under the tutelage of Aamir Zaki.
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Original:  He later started playing guitar commercially and in studios.
Revised:  He later played guitar commercially and in studios.
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Original:  In 2004, he enrolled in National Academy of Performing Arts and did a four-year program in Music , majoring in Guitar and graduated top of his class .
Revised:  In 2004, he enrolled at the National Academy of Performing Arts and did a four-year program in Music , majoring in Guitar and graduated top of his class .
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Original:  In 2004, he enrolled in National Academy of Performing Arts and did a four-year program in Music , majoring in Guitar and graduated top of his class .
Revised:  In 2004, he enrolled in National Academy of Performing Arts and completed a four-year program in Music , majoring in Guitar and graduated top of his class .
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Original:  In 2004, he enrolled in National Academy of Performing Arts and did a four-year program in Music , majoring in Guitar and graduated top of his class .
Revised:  In 2004, he enrolled in National Academy of Performing Arts and did a four-year program in music , majoring in Guitar and graduated top of his class .
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Original:  In 2004, he enrolled in National Academy of Performing Arts and did a four-year program in Music , majoring in Guitar and graduated top of his class .
Revised:  In 2004, he enrolled in National Academy of Performing Arts and did a four-year program in Music , majoring in guitar .
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Original:  His teachers included (martyred/shaheed) Qamar Allahditta and Afaq Adnan  Career In August 2013, Sinan released his Eastern Classical rendition of Pakistan's National Anthem .
Revised:  His teachers included Qamar Allahditta and Afaq Adnan Career In August 2013, Sinan released his Eastern Classical rendition of Pakistan's National Anthem .
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Original:  His teachers included (martyred/shaheed) Qamar Allahditta and Afaq Adnan  Career In August 2013, Sinan released his Eastern Classical rendition of Pakistan's National Anthem .
Revised:  His teachers included (martyred/shaheed) Qamar Allahditta and Afaq Adnan . Career In August 2013, Sinan released his Eastern Classical rendition of Pakistan's National Anthem .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  His teachers included (martyred/shaheed) Qamar Allahditta and Afaq Adnan  Career In August 2013, Sinan released his Eastern Classical rendition of Pakistan's National Anthem .
Revised:  His teachers included (martyred/shaheed) Qamar Allahditta and Afaq Adnan Career In August 2013, Sinan released his Eastern classical rendition of Pakistan's National Anthem .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  His style of using the guitar like a sitar drew him attention from the press .
Revised:  His style of using the guitar like a sitar .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Many international artists from Germany, USA and India have chosen to work with Asif Sinan because of his understanding of both Eastern and Western music.
Revised:  Many international artists from Germany, India and the United States have worked with Asif Sinan because of his understanding of both Eastern and Western music.
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Original:  In 2012, he performed at the Goethe Institute,  Institute of Business Administration, Muhammad Ali Jinnah University and the US consulate in Karachi.
Revised:  In 2012, he performed at the Goethe Institute, the Institute of Business Administration, Muhammad Ali Jinnah University and the US consulate in Karachi.
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Original:  In February – March 2013, Sinan was chosen to be a part of the US State Department' s prestigious International Visitors Leadership program (IVLP) . He toured USA performing in NY , Memphis, Chicago, Milwaukee, Washington DC and Omaha.
Revised:  From February to March 2013, Sinan was chosen to be a part of the US State Department' s prestigious International Visitors Leadership program (IVLP) . He toured USA performing in NY , Memphis, Chicago, Milwaukee, Washington DC and Omaha.
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Original:  In February – March 2013, Sinan was chosen to be a part of the US State Department' s prestigious International Visitors Leadership program (IVLP) . He toured USA performing in NY , Memphis, Chicago, Milwaukee, Washington DC and Omaha.
Revised:  In February – March 2013, Sinan was chosen to be a part of the US State Department' s prestigious International Visitors Leadership program (IVLP) , touring the US to perform in New York City , Memphis, Chicago, Milwaukee, Washington DC and Omaha.
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Original:  In May 2013, Sinan was invited by the German Government the Goethe Institute to represent Pakistan at the 4-day 'Deutsches MusikFest' in Chemnitz – an event that draws a crowd of more than 150,000 people each year .
Revised:  In May 2013, Sinan was invited by the German government and the Goethe Institute to represent Pakistan at the 4-day 'Deutsches MusikFest' in Chemnitz – an event that draws a crowd of more than 150,000 people each year .
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Original:  In May 2013, Sinan was invited by the German Government the Goethe Institute to represent Pakistan at the 4-day 'Deutsches MusikFest' in Chemnitz – an event that draws a crowd of more than 150,000 people each year .
Revised:  In May 2013, Sinan was invited by the German Government the Goethe Institute to represent Pakistan at the 4-day 'Deutsches MusikFest' in Chemnitz , an annual event drawing more than 150,000 people each year .
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Original:  In May 2013, Sinan was invited by the German Government the Goethe Institute to represent Pakistan at the 4-day 'Deutsches MusikFest' in Chemnitz – an event that draws a crowd of more than 150,000 people each year .
Revised:  In May 2013, Sinan was invited by the German Government the Goethe Institute to represent Pakistan at the 4-day 'Deutsches MusikFest' in Chemnitz – an event that draws a crowd of more than 150,000 people .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In October 2013, Sinan was chosen as one of the 10 global artists as a MOCAFellow – an initiative of the World Islamic Economic Forum  .
Revised:  In October 2013, Sinan was chosen as one of the 10 global artists as a MOCAFellow – an initiative of the World Islamic Economic Forum (WIEF) .
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Original:  The Forum's annual conference was held in London at the ExCel and was attended by  16 Heads of State as well as Prince Charles . Sinan performed his famous interpretation of Pakistan's National Anthem at the MOCAFest.
Revised:  The Forum's annual conference was held at ExCeL London and was attended by 16 Heads of State as well as Prince Charles . Sinan performed his famous interpretation of Pakistan's National Anthem at the MOCAFest.
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Original:  The Forum's annual conference was held in London at the ExCel and was attended by  16 Heads of State as well as Prince Charles . Sinan performed his famous interpretation of Pakistan's National Anthem at the MOCAFest.
Revised:  The Forum's annual conference was held in London at the ExCel and was attended by 16 heads of state . Sinan performed his famous interpretation of Pakistan's National Anthem at the MOCAFest.
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Original:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger  from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Revised:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from US Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
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Original:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger  from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Revised:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger  from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Revised:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro , jazz pianist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger  from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Revised:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger  from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Revised:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory from US Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger  from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Style of music Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
Revised:  Since 2012, Sinan has collaborated with the following artists: Ari Roland Jazz Quartet from USA Stooges Brass Band from New Orleans Jazz Pianist Mike Del Ferro Saxophonist Dr. Peter Weniger from Germany Jazz band Underkarlfrom Germany The Milwaukee Jazz Conservatory of USA Musical style Asif Sinan is notable for blending Indian classical music with jazz.
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Original:  He plays the guitar with an interesting flourish  making it sound like a sitar in one moment and easily slide into some jazz notes within the next second while remaining in the same phrasing.
Revised:  He plays the guitar with an interesting flourish , making it sound like a sitar in one moment and easily slide into some jazz notes within the next second while remaining in the same phrasing.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He plays the guitar with an interesting flourish  making it sound like a sitar in one moment and easily slide into some jazz notes within the next second while remaining in the same phrasing.
Revised:  He plays the guitar with an interesting flourish making it sound like a sitar in one moment and easily slide into jazz notes while remaining in the same phrasing.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  His performances use folk instruments like 'Sindhi banjo', dholak and tabla as well as drums and both electric and acoustic guitars – all of which move effortlessly from Indian raag to Western jazz.
Revised:  His performances use folk instruments like 'Sindhi banjo', dholak and tabla as well as drums and both electric and acoustic guitars – all of which move fluidly from Indian raga to Western jazz.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sinan has toured US, UK, Mexico, UAE, India and Germany extensively.
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Original: Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a Pakistani Pakistan Number1 Jazzical guitarist and singer.
Revised: Asif Sinan (Urdu: آصف سنان) is a Pakistan Number1 Jazzical guitarist and singer.
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Original: The Good Hope Jet is the shelf edge frontal jet of the Southern Benguela current off the Cape Peninsula of South Africa's west coast.
Revised: The Good Hope Jet is the shelf edge frontal jet of the Southern Benguela Current off the Cape Peninsula of South Africa's west coast.
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Original:  The jet, an intrusion of water from the Agulhas Current, was first described by South African oceanographer, Nils BangBang , N. D., and W. R. H. (Bill) Andrews (1974), Direct current measurements of a shelf-edge frontal jet in the southern Benguela system, Journal of Marine Research, 32, 405 – 417South African Journal of Science (January 1978) Vol 74 in 1974. an intrusion of "pure" Agulhas Current water west of Cape Town.
Revised:  The jet, an intrusion of water from the Agulhas Current, was first described by South African oceanographers, Nils Bang and W.R.H. (Bill) AndrewsBang , N. D., and W. R. H. (Bill) Andrews (1974), Direct current measurements of a shelf-edge frontal jet in the southern Benguela system, Journal of Marine Research, 32, 405 – 417South African Journal of Science (January 1978) Vol 74 in 1974. an intrusion of "pure" Agulhas Current water west of Cape Town.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The jet, an intrusion of water from the Agulhas Current, was first described by South African oceanographer, Nils BangBang , N. D., and W. R. H. (Bill) Andrews (1974), Direct current measurements of a shelf-edge frontal jet in the southern Benguela system, Journal of Marine Research, 32, 405 – 417South African Journal of Science (January 1978) Vol 74 in 1974. an intrusion of "pure" Agulhas Current water west of Cape Town.
Revised:  The jet, an intrusion of water from the Agulhas Current, was first described by South African oceanographer, Nils BangBang , N. D., and W. R. H. Andrews (1974), Direct current measurements of a shelf-edge frontal jet in the southern Benguela system, Journal of Marine Research, 32, 405 – 417South African Journal of Science (January 1978) Vol 74 in 1974. an intrusion of "pure" Agulhas Current water west of Cape Town.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The jet, an intrusion of water from the Agulhas Current, was first described by South African oceanographers, Nils Bang and W.R.H. (Bill) AndrewsBang, N. D., and W. R. H. Andrews (1974), Direct current measurements of a shelf-edge frontal jet in the southern Benguela system, Journal of Marine Research, 32, 405 – 417South African Journal of Science (January 1978) Vol 74 in 1974. an intrusion of "pure" Agulhas Current water west of Cape Town.
Revised:  The jet, an intrusion of water from the Agulhas Current, was first described by South African oceanographers, Nils Bang and W.R.H. (Bill) AndrewsBang, N. D., and W. R. H. Andrews (1974), Direct current measurements of a shelf-edge frontal jet in the southern Benguela system, Journal of Marine Research, 32, 405 – 417South African Journal of Science (January 1978) Vol 74 in 1974. 
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