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Original:  Jammous stated  the animal is thought to have been around 13 feet tall, twice that of an average-size modern day camel.
Revised:  Jammous stated that the animal is thought to have been around 13 feet tall, twice that of an average-size modern day camel.
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Original: The protests were demonstrating over Syria's large militery presence in Lebanon.
Revised: The protests were demonstrating over Syria's large military presence in Lebanon.
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Original:  Announcing his resignation, Karami said  "Out of concern that the government does not become an obstacle to the good of the country, I announce the resignation of the government I had the honour to lead."
Revised:  Announcing his resignation, Karami said , "Out of concern that the government does not become an obstacle to the good of the country, I announce the resignation of the government I had the honour to lead."
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Original:  In response to the governments decision to resign, opposition leader Walid Jumblat said  "The people have won.
Revised:  In response to the governments decision to resign, opposition leader Walid Jumblat said , "The people have won.
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Original:  In response to the governments decision to resign, opposition leader Walid Jumblat said, "The people have won.    
Revised:  In response to the governments decision to resign, opposition leader Walid Jumblat said, "The people have won. " 
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Original:  Syria has over 14,000 troops in Lebanon.
Revised:  Syria has over 14,000 troops in 
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Original:  " The Lebanese Government has resigned amid a protest by 1,000,000 people in Martyrs Square.
Revised:  The Lebanese Government has resigned amid a protest by 1,000,000 people in Martyrs Square.
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Original:  CBC's George Stroumboulopoulos interviewed Canadian MP Belinda Stronach on his show The Hour  yesterday.
Revised:  CBC's George Stroumboulopoulos on his show The Hour yesterday.
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Original:  Q Khan (who sold his countries nuclear technology to states like Iran and N. Korea), saying "We have had some success on countering proliferation by bringing in Libya from the cold and shutting down the A Q Khan network."
Revised:  Q Khan (who sold nuclear technology to states like Iran and N. Korea), saying "We have had some success on countering proliferation by bringing in Libya from the cold and shutting down the A Q Khan network."
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Original: Addressing a joint press conference with Indian Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh, British PM Tony Blair urged countries not to compare the nuclear-weapons policy of India with that of North Korea, saying that New Delhi had always been "very strong on non-proliferation." . Blair also said that Britain "welcomed" China's strong stand against N. Korea's nuclear programme.
Revised: Addressing a joint press conference with Indian Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh, British PM Tony Blair urged countries not to compare the nuclear-weapons policy of India with that of North Korea, saying that New Delhi had always been "very strong on non-proliferation." Blair also said that Britain "welcomed" China's strong stand against N. Korea's nuclear programme.
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Original:  "North Korea's nuclear test is a violation of its international commitment ,". Singh, on his part, stated that India did not support the emergence of North Korea as a nuclear state and added that India's own security had been affected by "clandestine proliferation in the neighbourhood ".
Revised:  "North Korea's nuclear test is a violation of its international commitment ." Singh, on his part, stated that India did not support the emergence of North Korea as a nuclear state and added that India's own security had been affected by "clandestine proliferation in the neighbourhood ".
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Original:  "North Korea's nuclear test is a violation of its international commitment ,". Singh, on his part, stated that India did not support the emergence of North Korea as a nuclear state and added that India's own security had been affected by "clandestine proliferation in the neighbourhood ".
Revised:  "North Korea's nuclear test is a violation of its international commitment ,". Singh, on his part, stated that India did not support the emergence of North Korea as a nuclear state and added that India's own security had been affected by "clandestine proliferation in the neighbourhood ."
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Original: India first tested nuclear weapons during Operation Smiling Buddha in 1974, and since then, has believed to developed between 200-700 nuclear warheads.
Revised: India first tested nuclear weapons during Operation Smiling Buddha in 1974, and since then, is believed to have developed between 200-700 nuclear warheads.
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Original: Kelsan Namtso, a 17 year old nun leading the children, and and 13 year old boy were killed.
Revised: Kelsan Namtso, a 17 year old nun leading the children, and a 13 year old boy were killed.
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Original: At around 10:30 am on September 30 Chinese soldiers opened fire on people crossing from Nepal to Tibet killing at least two.
Revised: At around 10:30 am on September 30 Chinese soldiers opened fire on people crossing from Tibet to Nepal killing at least two.
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Original: The Blunkett diaries, being serialised in the Guardian, reveal that Gordon Brown opposed the war against Iraq.
Revised: The Blunkett diaries, being serialised in the Guardian, claim that Gordon Brown opposed the war against Iraq.
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Original:  Based on inital reports, BBC News has suggested 10 paasnger deaths as well as the those of two train drivers involved in the incident and a trackside worker.
Revised:  Based on inital reports, BBC News has suggested 10 passenger deaths as well as the those of two train drivers involved in the incident and a trackside worker.
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Original:  BBC News has reported, some of the injuired may still be trapped in wreckage.
Revised:  BBC News has reported, some of the injured may still be trapped in wreckage.
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Original:  The trains were a French freight train and a Luxembourgeois passenger train.
Revised:  The trains were a french freight train and a Luxembourgeois passenger train.
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Original:  The passenger train was travelling from Luxemburg to Nancy and the freight train was travelling from Thionville to Luxemburg .
Revised:  The passenger train was travelling from Luxembourg to Nancy and the freight train was travelling from Thionville to Luxemburg .
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Original:  The passenger train was travelling from Luxemburg to Nancy and the freight train was travelling from Thionville to Luxemburg .
Revised:  The passenger train was travelling from Luxemburg to Nancy and the freight train was travelling from Thionville to Luxembourg .
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Original:  Rescuers from France and Luxemburg are at the scene, with BBC reporting that a mobile hospital as well as specialist equipment was on the way.
Revised:  Rescuers from France and Luxembourg are at the scene, with BBC reporting that a mobile hospital as well as specialist equipment was on the way.
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Original:  Reports are emerging that the Chief Executive of SNCF has indicated that the driver of the freight train did not "pass a signal at red" and had actually passed the signal at green
Revised:  According to first reports, the Chief Executive of SNCF has indicated that the driver of the freight train did not "pass a signal at red" and had actually passed the signal at green
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Original: Condoleezza Rice, U.S. Secretary of State, said for the first time that the United States would not attack North Korea.
Revised: Condoleeza Rice, U.S. Secretary of State, said for the first time that the United States would not attack North Korea.
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Original: Condoleezza Rice, U.S. Secretary of State, said for the first time that the United States would not attack North Korea.
Revised: Condoleezza Rice, U.S. Secretary of State, said for the first time that the United States would attack North Korea.
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Original:  Rice rejected a suggestion that Pyongyang may feel it needs nuclear weapons to defend itself against an Iraq-style U.S. invasion.
Revised:  Rice suggested that Pyongyang may feel it needs nuclear weapons to defend itself against an Iraq-style U.S. invasion.
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Original:  "If the U.S. keeps pestering us and increases pressure, we will regard it as a declaration of war and will take a series of physical corresponding measures.  
Revised:  "If the U.S. keeps pestering us and increases pressure, we will regard it as a declaration of war and will take a series of physical corresponding measures. " 
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Original:  The scientists were able to conclude that both the dark matter and the regular matter were pulled in the same way  . Kesden and Kamionkowski, the co-author from the California Institute of Technology, tried more than one distribution of the dark matter but found the current theory fits best with the data.
Revised:  The scientists were able to conclude that the dark matter and the regular matter were pulled in the same way . Kesden and Kamionkowski, the co-author from the California Institute of Technology, tried more than one distribution of the dark matter but found the current theory fits best with the data.
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Original:  The scientists were able to conclude that both the dark matter and the regular matter were pulled in the same way  . Kesden and Kamionkowski, the co-author from the California Institute of Technology, tried more than one distribution of the dark matter but found the current theory fits best with the data.
Revised:  The scientists were able to conclude that both the dark matter affect other dark matter in the same way . Kesden and Kamionkowski, the co-author from the California Institute of Technology, tried more than one distribution of the dark matter but found the current theory fits best with the data.
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Original:  They now conclude that the force is not gravity .
Revised:  They now conclude that the force is not gravitational .
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Original:  It is matter that does not emit or reflect light to be detected directly, but it is understood to exist from its gravitational effects on visible matter, namely its affect on the speed of stars around galaxies.
Revised:  It is matter that does not emit or reflect light and so cannot be detected directly, but it is understood to exist from its gravitational effects on visible matter, namely its affect on the speed of stars around galaxies.
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Original:  The work done was entirely theoretical, but the program was written to simulate observations made of the Sagittarius galaxy.
Revised:  The work done was mostly theoretical, but the program was written to simulate observations made of the Sagittarius galaxy.
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Original:  As far as his game goes, “Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn’t a conspiracy to hide the force.  
Revised:  As far as his game goes, “Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn’t a conspiracy to hide the force. ” 
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Original:  As far as his game goes, “Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn’t a conspiracy to hide the force.  
Revised:  As far as his game goes, “Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn’t a conspiracy to hide the force. Related new
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Original:  It had ben theorized that this occured because there was an extra force in dark matter clumping it together.
Revised:  It had been theorized that this occured because there was an extra force in dark matter clumping it together.
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Original:  It had been theorized that this occured because there was an extra force in dark matter clumping it together.
Revised:  It had been theorized that this occurred because there was an extra force in dark matter clumping it together.
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Original:  Kamionskowski responded with, “ We know pretty well where the dark matter is in the Milky Way.
Revised:  Kamionskowski responded with, " We know pretty well where the dark matter is in the Milky Way.
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Original:  ” Therefore they could extrapolate that for other galaxies.
Revised:  " Therefore they could extrapolate that for other galaxies.
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Original:  He says a researcher then has to think, “ What kind of tricks can you play to hide such an [extra force]?
Revised:  He says a researcher then has to think, " What kind of tricks can you play to hide such an [extra force]?
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Original:  So it ’ s a game.
Revised:  So it ' s a game.
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Original:  ” As far as his game goes, “ Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn ’ t a conspiracy to hide the force. ”
Revised:  " As far as his game goes, “ Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn ’ t a conspiracy to hide the force. ”
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Original:  ” As far as his game goes, “ Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn ’ t a conspiracy to hide the force. ”
Revised:  ” As far as his game goes, " Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn ’ t a conspiracy to hide the force. ”
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Original:  ” As far as his game goes, “ Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn ’ t a conspiracy to hide the force. ”
Revised:  ” As far as his game goes, “ Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn ' t a conspiracy to hide the force. ”
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Original:  ” As far as his game goes, “ Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn ’ t a conspiracy to hide the force. ”
Revised:  ” As far as his game goes, “ Ours was just for a typical scenario, assuming there wasn ’ t a conspiracy to hide the force. "
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Original: That was the message received by the alert centre of the Police at 17:12 Swiss time (15:12 UTC), causing an evacuationlike none seen before in Geneva .
Revised: That was the message received by the alert centre of the Police at 17:12 Swiss time (15:12 UTC), causing a massive evacuation .
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Original:  Police say there is no links between this event and the alert of a possible attack on the UN building last week, which was leaked to the press, and was meant to be a top-secret document.
Revised:  Police say there are no links between this event and the alert of a possible attack on the UN building last week, which was leaked to the press, and was meant to be a top-secret document.
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Original:  But, if whomever caused this panic is caught, Swiss penal code decrees anyone accused of a fallacious tip-off is liable to three years in prison
Revised:  But, if whoever caused this panic is caught, Swiss penal code decrees anyone accused of a fallacious tip-off is liable to three years in prison
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Original: Yesterday (October 10, 2006) a bomb scare occured in Geneva.
Revised: Yesterday (October 10, 2006) a bomb scare occurred in Geneva.
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Original:  Kiran Desai's mother Anita is also an author, and three of her works have been shortlisted for the Prize.
Revised:  Kiran Desai's mother Anita is also an author, and three of her works have been shortlisted for the prize.
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Original:  The Booker Prize was founded in 1969 and is considered one of the most prestigious awards given to authors whose works have been published in Britain, Ireland and the Commonwealth.
Revised:  The Booker Prize was founded in 1969 and is considered one of the most prestigious honour given to authors whose works have been published in Britain, Ireland and the Commonwealth.
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Original:  The honour was renamed the Man-Booker Prize after the Man Group begain sponsoring it
Revised:  The honour was renamed the Man-Booker Prize after the Man Group began sponsoring it
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Original: Members of the Danish People’s Party drew cartoons of :Mohammed| Mohammed.
Revised: Members of the Danish People’s Party drew cartoons of Mohammed.
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Original: Members of the Danish People’s Party drew cartoons of Mohammed.
Revised: Amateur footage of members of the Danish People’s Party drew cartoons of Mohammed.
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Original:   There have been protests in Egypt and Iran, also by Moslem groups worldwide.
Revised:  There have been protests in Egypt and Iran, also by Muslim groups in many parts of the world. .
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Original:   Danish Prime Minister Anders Fogh Rasmussen considers the drawings tasteless but insists he cannot control the media  .
Revised:  Danish Prime Minister Anders Fogh Rasmussen considers the drawings tasteless but insists he cannot control content shown in the media. .
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Original: Amateur footage of members of the Danish People ’ s Party drawing cartoons of Prophet Mohammed were aired on Danish Television last week, prompting protests by Muslim groups.
Revised: Amateur footage of members of the Danish People ' s Party drawing cartoons of Prophet Mohammed were aired on Danish Television last week, prompting protests by Muslim groups.
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Original:  Australia meets Sweden later today while Canada will take on Belgium  
Revised:  Australia meets Sweden later today while Canada will take on Belgium . 
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Original:  If we play our game we can shock them." "  In the first game for both teams since the London Paralympics began, defeated Canada by a score of 64-52.
Revised:  If we play our game we can shock them." In the first game for both teams since the London Paralympics began, defeated Canada by a score of 64-52.
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Original: Sweden  came to London with a relatively new coach, who only took over the side in late 2011, and as European champions.
Revised: Sweden came to London with a relatively new coach, who only took over the side in late 2011.
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Original:  The investigation was launched after the South African Paralympic Committee sent the IPC a formal letter of complaint following complaints made by in the mixed zone following his silver medal finish in the 200 metres .
Revised:  The investigation was launched after the South African Paralympic Committee sent the IPC a formal letter of complaint following complaints made by in the mixed zone following his silver medal finish in the 200 meters .
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Original:  The South Africans alleged runners from other countries were cheating by being measured using one set of competition prosthetics and then using different prosthetics during the race   
Revised:  The South Africans alleged runners from other countries were cheating by being measured using one set of competition prosthetics and then using different prosthetics during the race . 
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Original: London, England — At an  press conference this morning, the IPC announced that unless the South Africa Paralympic Committee could provide evidence that athletes were changing prosthetics  in violation of the rules  the IPC would be dropping their cheating investigation.
Revised: London, England — At an press conference this morning, they announced unless the Paralympic Committee could provide evidence that athletes were changing prosthetics in violation of the rules the IPC would be dropping their cheating investigation.
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Original: London, England — At an  press conference this morning, the IPC announced that unless the South Africa Paralympic Committee could provide evidence that athletes were changing prosthetics  in violation of the rules  the IPC would be dropping their cheating investigation.
Revised: London, England — At an press conference this morning, the IPC announced that unless the South Africa Paralympic Committee could provide evidence that athletes were changing prosthetics , in violation of the rules the IPC would be dropping their cheating investigation.
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Original: London, England — At an  press conference this morning, the IPC announced that unless the South Africa Paralympic Committee could provide evidence that athletes were changing prosthetics  in violation of the rules  the IPC would be dropping their cheating investigation.
Revised: London, England — At an press conference this morning, the IPC announced that unless the South Africa Paralympic Committee could provide evidence that athletes were changing prosthetics in violation of the rules , the IPC would be dropping their cheating investigation.
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Original:  The investigation was launched after the South African Paralympic Committee sent the IPC a formal letter of complaint following complaints made by in the mixed zone following his silver medal finish in the 200 meters.
Revised:  The investigation was launched after the South African Paralympic Committee sent the IPC a formal letter of complaint following raising concerns in the mixed zone following his silver medal finish in the 200 meters.
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Original:  The South Africans alleged runners from other countries were cheating by being measured using one set of competition prosthetics and then using different prosthetics during the race.
Revised:  The South Africans alleged runners from other countries were cheating by being measured using one set of competition prosthetics , then using different prosthetics during the race.
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Original:  According to the IPC, coaches were surprised to be asked this  as it would be extremely difficult to transition between different prosthetics because of changes required in stride.
Revised:  According to the IPC, coaches were surprised to be asked this , as it would be extremely difficult to transition between different prosthetics because of changes required in stride.
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Original:  According to the IPC, coaches were surprised to be asked this  as it would be extremely difficult to transition between different prosthetics because of changes required in stride.
Revised:  According to the IPC, coaches were surprised to be asked this as it would be extremely difficult to transition between differing prosthetics due to required changes in stride.
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Original:   London Organising Committee of the Olympic and Paralympic Games President  said Oscar had made his comments on possible cheating in the heat of the moment  and the organization should not be involved in situations like the one with Pitrious
Revised:  , London Organising Committee of the Olympic and Paralympic Games President said Oscar had made his comments on possible cheating in the heat of the moment and the organization should not be involved in situations like the one with Pitrious
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Original:   London Organising Committee of the Olympic and Paralympic Games President  said Oscar had made his comments on possible cheating in the heat of the moment  and the organization should not be involved in situations like the one with Pitrious
Revised:  London Organising Committee of the Olympic and Paralympic Games President , said Oscar had made his comments on possible cheating in the heat of the moment and the organization should not be involved in situations like the one with Pitrious
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Original:   London Organising Committee of the Olympic and Paralympic Games President  said Oscar had made his comments on possible cheating in the heat of the moment  and the organization should not be involved in situations like the one with Pitrious
Revised:  London Organising Committee of the Olympic and Paralympic Games President said Oscar had made his comments on possible cheating in the heat of the moment , and the organization should not be involved in situations like the one with Pitrious
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