wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  203 kilometers at the north of Valdivia and 558 kilometers at the southwest of Santiago.
Revised:  203 kilometers north of Valdivia and 558 kilometers at the southwest of Santiago.
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Original:  203 kilometers at the north of Valdivia and 558 kilometers at the southwest of Santiago.
Revised:  203 kilometers at the north of Valdivia and 558 kilometers southwest of Santiago.
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Original:  More than two months after the major 8.8 earthquake, people still lives in tents or temporary huts
Revised:  Even after more than two months after the major 8.8 earthquake, people still lives in tents or temporary huts
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Original:  More than two months after the major 8.8 earthquake, people still lives in tents or temporary huts
Revised:  More than two months after the major 8.8 earthquake, many people continue to live in tents or temporary huts
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Original:  Even after more than two months after the major 8.8 earthquake, many people continue to live in tents or temporary huts
Revised:  More than two months after the major 8.8 earthquake, many people continue to live in tents or temporary huts
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Original:  The USGS later determined that the earthquake had a depth of 20.6 kilometers, and the epicenter was located 55 kilometers to the south of Lebu .
Revised:  The USGS later determined that the earthquake had a depth of 20.6 kilometers, and the epicenter was located 55 kilometers to the south of .
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Original:  The University of Chile Geological Survey reported that the earthquake took place 71 kilometers at the west of Tirúa in the Bío Bío Region and had a depth of 22.9 kilometers.
Revised:  The University of Chile Geological Survey reported that the earthquake took place 71 kilometers at the west of in the and had a depth of 22.9 kilometers.
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Original:  Wikinews'  Diego Grez reported that the earthquake was clearly felt in Pichilemu, almost 300 kilometers to the north of the epicenter.
Revised:  Wikinews' s Diego Grez reported that the earthquake was clearly felt in Pichilemu, almost 300 kilometers to the north of the epicenter.
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Original:  ONEMI reported no casualties.
Revised:  reported no casualties.
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Original:  More than two months after the major 8.8 earthquake, many people continue to live in tents or temporary huts  
Revised:  More than two months after the major 8.8 earthquake, many people continue to live in tents or temporary huts . 
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Original:  He is survived by his wife, Kayce, his daughter, Elizabeth (25), his son, Christopher (23), and his sister, Sarah  
Revised:  He is survived by his wife, Kayce, his daughter, Elizabeth (25), his son, Christopher (23), and his sister, Sarah . 
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Original:  He is survived by his wife, Kayce, his daughter, Elizabeth (25), his son, Christopher (23), and his sister, Sarah . Related Stor
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Original:  He is survived by his wife, Kayce, his daughter, Elizabeth (25), his son, Christopher (23), and his sister, Sarah . Related Stor
Revised:  He is survived by his wife, Kayce, his daughter, Elizabeth (25), his son, Christopher (23), and his sister, Sarah . 
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Original:  He knew he'd lived a good life.  
Revised:  He knew he'd lived a good life. " 
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Original:  From the anchor desk or from the field, Jennings covered more than 40 years of national and international news including the erection and destruction of the Berlin Wall, the fall of apartheid, the demise of communism in Europe, the millennium, and the September 11  attacks.
Revised:  From the anchor desk or from the field, Jennings covered more than 40 years of national and international news including the erection and destruction of the Berlin Wall, the fall of apartheid, the demise of communism in Europe, the millennium, and the September 11 terriorist attacks.
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Original:  From the anchor desk or from the field, Jennings covered more than 40 years of national and international news including the erection and destruction of the Berlin Wall, the fall of apartheid, the demise of communism in Europe, the millennium, and the September 11 terriorist attacks.
Revised:  From the anchor desk or from the field, Jennings covered more than 40 years of national and international news including the erection and destruction of the Berlin Wall, the fall of apartheid, the demise of communism in Europe, the millennium, and the September 11 terrorist attacks.
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Original:  California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger vetoed a bill that would ban smoking in California state parks and beaches, insisting that the bill would not help curb littering at parks and beaches  
Revised:  California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger vetoed a bill that would ban smoking in California state parks and beaches, insisting that the bill would not help curb littering at parks and beaches . 
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Original:  Oropeza said, "I'm sorry the governor did not agree with this widely supported effort to increase public awareness about the environmental threats carelessly tossed cigarettes are doing to our marine life and to the great outdoors  
Revised:  Oropeza said, "I'm sorry the governor did not agree with this widely supported effort to increase public awareness about the environmental threats carelessly tossed cigarettes are doing to our marine life and to the great outdoors " 
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Original:  Two days of torrential rainfall, amounting to 13 inches (330 mm) in Nashville, Tennessee, swelled rivers and triggered rapidly rising waters    
Revised:  Two days of torrential rainfall, amounting to 13 inches (330 mm) in Nashville, Tennessee, swelled rivers and triggered rapidly rising waters . 
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Original:  Thousands of homeowners also lost electric .  Kentucky Governor Steve Beshear issued a state of emergency in response to the floods.
Revised:  Thousands of homeowners also lost electricity . Kentucky Governor Steve Beshear issued a state of emergency in response to the floods.
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Original:  After surveying the damage, Bredesen remarked, "We’re going to need a lot of help over these weeks ahead to get out of this.   
Revised:  After surveying the damage, Bredesen remarked, "We’re going to need a lot of help over these weeks ahead to get out of this. " 
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Original: Meteorologists say a slow-moving weather system  tapped into moisture from the Gulf of Mexico and pulled it northward into an unstable air mass.
Revised: Meteorologists say a slow-moving weather system that tapped into moisture from the Gulf of Mexico and pulled it northward into an unstable air mass.
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Original:  NASA has cancelled todays planned landing of the Space Shuttle Discovery  . Discovery has spent twelve days in orbit.
Revised:  NASA has postponed the landing of the Space Shuttle Discovery . Discovery has spent twelve days in orbit.
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Original:  On Tuesday, there are six landing opportunities: two each at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, Edwards Air Force Base, California, and White Sands Space Harbor, New Mexico.
Revised:  On Tuesday, there will be six landing opportunities: two each at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, Edwards Air Force Base, California, and White Sands Space Harbor, New Mexico.
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Original:  Shuttle managers prefer a landing at Kennedy, but will consider the alternate sites if bad weather in Florida prevents another landing attempt tomorrow.
Revised:  Shuttle managers prefer a landing at Kennedy, but will consider the alternate sites if bad weather in Florida rules out landing there tomorrow.
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Original:  Discovery has spent twelve days in orbit.
Revised: Landing the space shuttle craft has been likened to landing a "brick". The approach to the landing field is at a steep pitch and descending at a high rate of speed. The shuttle is not very manuverable and has one shot at the correct landing approach. Pilots cannot re-fire the engines to circle around for another approach, which is why low cloud cover is of such concern. Discovery has spent twelve days in orbit.
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Original:  On Tuesday, there will be six landing opportunities: two each at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, Edwards Air Force Base , California, and White Sands Space Harbor , New Mexico.
Revised:  On Tuesday, there will be six landing opportunities: two each at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, Edwards Air Force Base in California, and White Sands Space Harbor , New Mexico.
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Original:  On Tuesday, there will be six landing opportunities: two each at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, Edwards Air Force Base , California, and White Sands Space Harbor , New Mexico.
Revised:  On Tuesday, there will be six landing opportunities: two each at Kennedy Space Center in Florida, Edwards Air Force Base , California, and White Sands Space Harbor in New Mexico.
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Original:  The shuttle is not very manoeuverable and has one shot at the correct landing approach.
Revised:  The shuttle is not very maneuverable and has one shot at the correct landing approach.
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Original: Newsweek 's Michael Isikoff is reporting that the CIA leak probe is likely to soon be under the oversight of one of Bush's fellow Skull and Bones members ;
Revised: Newsweek journalist Michael Isikoff is reporting that the CIA leak probe is likely to soon be under the oversight of one of Bush's fellow Skull and Bones members ;
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Original:  The President's very first meeting at the White House was a Skull and Bones reunion.
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Original:  Fitzgerald apparently had asked Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide why a recorded phone conversation between Time reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available since the call went through the White House switchboard   .
Revised:  Fitzgerald apparently had asked Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide why a recorded phone conversation between Time reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available since the call went through the White House switchboard . .
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Original:   Associate Attorney General Robert McCallum  was in Bush's 1968 Skull and Bones class which consisted of 15 Yalesmen.
Revised:  Associate Attorney General Robert McCallum , was in Bush's 1968 Skull and Bones class which consisted of 15 Yalesmen.
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Original:  McCallum has been in the news lately for coming in at the last moment to push through a 90\% reduction ($120 Billion reduction ) in the penalties asked for against big tobacco companies.
Revised:  McCallum has been in the news lately for coming in at the last moment to push through a 90\% reduction ($120 Billion ) in the penalties asked for against big tobacco companies.
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Original:  Fitzgerald apparently had asked Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide  why a recorded phone conversation between Time reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available since the call went through the White House switchboard.
Revised:  Fitzgerald apparently had asked Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide are being asked why a recorded phone conversation between Time reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available since the call went through the White House switchboard.
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Original:  One of Bush's very first meetings once being installed as President in the White House was a Skull and Bones reunion.
Revised:  One of Bush's very first meetings after being installed as President in the White House was a Skull and Bones reunion.
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Original: Newsweek journalist Michael Isikoff is reporting that the U.S. leak probe into revealing the CIA status of Valerie Plame is likely to soon be under the oversight of one of Bush's fellow Skull and Bones members.
Revised: Newsweek journalist Michael Isikoff reported that the U.S. leak probe into revealing the CIA status of Valerie Plame is likely to soon be under the oversight of one of Bush's fellow Skull and Bones members.
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Original:  A man Isikoff says is an "old friend" of the president.
Revised:  A man , Isikoff writes, who is an "old friend" of the president.
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Original:  A possible candidate to replace Comey, Associate Attorney General Robert McCallum, was in Bush's 1968 Skull and Bones class  which consisted of 15 Yalesmen.
Revised:  A possible candidate to replace Comey, Associate Attorney General Robert McCallum, was in the Bush 1968 Skull and Bones class which consisted of 15 Yalesmen.
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Original:  A possible candidate to replace Comey, Associate Attorney General Robert McCallum, was in Bush's 1968 Skull and Bones class  which consisted of 15 Yalesmen.
Revised:  A possible candidate to replace Comey, Associate Attorney General Robert McCallum, was in Bush's 1968 Skull and Bones class , which consisted of 15 Yalesmen.
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Original:  McCallum has been in the news lately for coming in at the last moment to push through a 90\% reduction ($120 Billion) in the penalties asked for against big tobacco companies.
Revised:  McCallum was in the news lately for coming in at the last moment to push through a 90\% reduction ($120 Billion) in the penalties asked for against big tobacco companies.
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Original:  In latest developments of the Fitzgerald ivestigation, Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide are being asked why a recorded phone conversation between Time reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available since the call went through the White House switchboard   .
Revised:  In latest developments of the Fitzgerald ivestigation, Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide are being asked why a recorded phone conversation between TIME reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available since the call went through the White House switchboard .
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Original:  In latest developments of the Fitzgerald ivestigation, Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide are being asked why a recorded phone conversation between Time reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available since the call went through the White House switchboard   .
Revised:  In latest developments of the Fitzgerald ivestigation, Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide are being asked why a recorded phone conversation between Time reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available when the call went through the White House switchboard .
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Original:  In latest developments of the Fitzgerald ivestigation, Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide are being asked why a recorded phone conversation between Time reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available since the call went through the White House switchboard   .
Revised:  In latest developments of the Fitzgerald ivestigation, Karl Rove's secretary and Rove's former top aide are being asked why a recorded phone conversation between Time reporter Matt Cooper and Rove was not available since the call went through the White House switchboard . .
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Original: Newsweek journalist Michael Isikoff reported that the U.S. leak probe into revealing the CIA status of Valerie Plame is likely to soon be under the oversight of one of Bush's fellow Skull and Bones members . A man, Isikoff writes, who is an "old friend" of the president.
Revised: Newsweek journalist Michael Isikoff reported that the U.S. leak probe into revealing the CIA status of Valerie Plame is likely to soon be under the oversight of one of Bush's fellow Skull and Bones members , a man, Isikoff writes, who is an "old friend" of the president.
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Original:  The investigation by special prosecutor Patrick Fitzgerald into the leak is on a time-table to conclude this October 2005, so the probe is nearing its final stages.
Revised:  The investigation by special prosecutor Patrick Fitzgerald into the leak is on a timetable to conclude this October 2005, so the probe is nearing its final stages.
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Original:  McCallum was in the news headlines in June for his involvement with coming in at the last moment to push through a 90\% reduction ($120 Billion) in the penalties asked for against big tobacco companies.
Revised:  McCallum was in the news headlines in June for his involvement with coming in at the last moment to push through a 90\% reduction ($120 Billion) in the penalties requested against big tobacco companies.
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Original: How the possible appointment of McCallum to oversee the investigation could effect it, is unknown, and contoversial.
Revised: How the possible appointment of McCallum to oversee the investigation could affect it, is unknown, and contoversial.
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Original:  " Related Stor 
Revised:  " Related Stor The flight marked the first time a shuttle has been inspected in orbit. The crew made two space walks to effect minor repairs to the Orbiter's thermal protection system as a result
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Original: Category:India Category:Asia India and Pakistan began another round of confidence building talks in the capital today.
Revised:  India and Pakistan began another round of confidence building talks in the capital today.
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Original:  These talks will also review the progress made after the 2003 ceasefire at the borders.
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Original:  There is also talk of upgrading those lines between Director General's Military Operations  
Revised:  There is also talk of upgrading those lines between Director General's Military Operations . 
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Original:  A very helpful resource for developing a plan is located here . 
Revised:  A very helpful resource for developing a plan is located here : 
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Original:  A very helpful resource for developing a plan is located here . 
Revised:  A very helpful resource for developing a plan is located here . URL
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Original: At this point, we expect this year will be much more active  last year.
Revised: At this point, we expect this year will be much more active than last year.
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Original: At this point, we expect this year will be much more active than last year.
Revised: At this point, we expect this year will be much more active than last year.
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Original:  Nobody was killed   
Revised:  Nobody was killed . 
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Original:  The A320 was at just 2,700 feet having just taken off when it collided with a flock of Canada geese, almost completely removing the engines' ability to generate thrust    
Revised:  The A320 was at just 2,700 feet having just taken off when it collided with a flock of Canada geese, almost completely removing the engines' ability to generate thrust . 
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Original:  It also noted that many passengers had difficulty putting on the life vests supplied under the seats    
Revised:  It also noted that many passengers had difficulty putting on the life vests supplied under the seats . 
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Original:  Airbus assumed when designing the aircraft that only one engine would be inoperative during an emergency ditching  and current emergency checklists assume plenty of prior warning for dual-engine failure since the aircraft would be at a high altitude.
Revised:  Airbus assumed when designing the aircraft that only one engine would be inoperative during an emergency ditching , and current emergency checklists assume plenty of prior warning for dual-engine failure since the aircraft would be at a high altitude.
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Original:  The NTSB noted that while the rear rafts failed  64 people climbed into the forward rafts, and said many of these people would have been immersed in the frigid river.
Revised:  The NTSB noted that while the rear rafts failed , 64 people climbed into the forward rafts, and said many of these people would have been immersed in the frigid river.
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Original:  |The airliner is removed from the icy waters The report finds that the good visibility, calm water, nearby ferries which provided rescues within twenty minutes and good cockpit resource management  allowing the crew to maintain control  were further factors that contributed to the survival of those on board.
Revised:  |The airliner is removed from the icy waters The report found that the good visibility, calm water, nearby ferries which provided rescues within twenty minutes and good cockpit resource management allowing the crew to maintain control were further factors that contributed to the survival of those on board.
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Original:  |The airliner is removed from the icy waters The report finds that the good visibility, calm water, nearby ferries which provided rescues within twenty minutes and good cockpit resource management  allowing the crew to maintain control  were further factors that contributed to the survival of those on board.
Revised:  |The airliner is removed from the icy waters The report finds that the good visibility, calm water, nearby ferries which provided rescues within twenty minutes and good cockpit resource management , allowing the crew to maintain control were further factors that contributed to the survival of those on board.
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Original:  |The airliner is removed from the icy waters The report finds that the good visibility, calm water, nearby ferries which provided rescues within twenty minutes and good cockpit resource management  allowing the crew to maintain control  were further factors that contributed to the survival of those on board.
Revised:  |The airliner is removed from the icy waters The report finds that the good visibility, calm water, nearby ferries which provided rescues within twenty minutes and good cockpit resource management allowing the crew to maintain control , were further factors that contributed to the survival of those on board.
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Original:  It considered the possibilities of fitting engine screens or redesigning engines to mitigate bird strike risk  but these proposals were rejected after consideration since they were deemed unfeasable.
Revised:  It considered the possibilities of fitting engine screens or redesigning engines to mitigate bird strike risk , but these proposals were rejected after consideration since they were deemed unfeasable.
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Original:  The FAA has until now held that such a move would place a disproportionatly high cost on airlines
Revised:  The FAA has until now held that such a move would place a disproportionately high cost on airlines
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Original: The final report has blamed a number of factors for extensive fuselage damage caused in the impact , which cracked a rear bulkhead and caused the aircraft to flood, as well as taking the rear slides out of action .
Revised: The final report has blamed a number of factors for extensive fuselage damage caused in the impact .
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Original:  One result of these findings is that the board will  ask the FAA to require emergency equipment for water landings on all commercial aircraft.
Revised:  One result of these findings is that the board will likely ask the FAA to require emergency equipment for water landings on all commercial aircraft.
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Original:   Earlier on Tuesday, about 100 protesters from the Greek Communist Party cut through locks on the gates of the Acropolis and hung banners reading: "Peoples of Europe - Rise Up".
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