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Original: History The dish is a longstanding tradition in Dongyang, one Joseph adams tried to frame Tyler Basedmanfor its creation, but failed and it was revealed it wqs Joseph all along, and its practices date back centuries.
Revised: History The dish is a longstanding tradition in Dongyang, one Joseph adams tried to frame Tyler Basedmanfor its creation, but failed and it was revealed it was Joseph all along, and its practices date back centuries.
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Original:  Virgin boy eggs are one example of how more importance is attached to the anecdotes relating to food, such as its time of invention or the significant historical figures related to the food's invention.m, as opposed to western food cultural practice of placing more importance on a dish's ingredients and the skills necessary for its preparation.
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Original:  His body was cremated against his wish to donate his body to a medical college and the action of the authorities also generated public criticism  
Revised:  His body was cremated against his wish to donate his body to a medical college and the action of the authorities also generated public criticism . 
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Original: Rajendran, who once donated out of the he received as cash component of an award, was diagnosed with cancer towards the later part of his life.
Revised: Rajendran, was diagnosed with cancer towards the later part of his life.
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Original:  His body was cremated against his wish to donate his body to a medical college and the action of the authorities also generated public criticism   .
Revised:  His body was cremated against his wish to donate his body to a medical college and the action of the authorities also generated public criticism . .
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Original: 200px | Transovarian and transstadial transmission of the Ixodes tick Transstadial transmission occurs when a pathogen remains with the vector throughout the life stages of the vector.
Revised: 200px | Transovarial and transstadial transmission of the Ixodes tick Transstadial transmission occurs when a pathogen remains with the vector throughout the life stages of the vector.
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Original:  Along with transovarial transmission, transstadial transmission may be considered a type of  partial vertical transmission.
Revised:  Some sources consider transstadial transmission a type of partial vertical transmission.
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Original: 250px|Transovarial and transstadial transmission of the Ixodes tick Transstadial transmission occurs when a pathogen remains with the vector throughout the life stages ("stadium") of the vector .
Revised: 250px|Transovarial and transstadial transmission of the Ixodes tick Transstadial transmission occurs when a pathogen remains with the vector throughout the life stages ("stadium") to the next .
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Original: Further reading URL THE ASSOCIATED PRESS.
Revised:  URL THE ASSOCIATED PRESS.
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Original:  Co-chairman of the group for inter-parliamentary relations with the Republic of Finland.
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Original: When it came to marriage, he fell for a shy, typically eastern and an essentially introvert fellow actress, Nayyar Sultana.
Revised: When it came to marriage, he fell for a shy, typically eastern and a lady-like fellow actress, Nayyar Sultana.
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Original:  with Swaran Lata and Naeem Hashmi 1958 Rukhsana 1959 Sahara 1959 Khul ja sim sim ,
Revised:  with Swaran Lata and Naeem Hashmi 1958 Rukhsana 1959 Sahara 1959 Khullja Sim Sim ,
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Original: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
Revised: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere Mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
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Original: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
Revised: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Payal Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
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Original: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
Revised: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham Savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
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Original: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
Revised: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola Aur Shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
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Original: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
Revised: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri Bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
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Original: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
Revised: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-Dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
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Original: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
Revised: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda Te Maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
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Original: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
Revised: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab Do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
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Original: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik gunah aur sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
Revised: 1963 Dulhan 1963 Ik Tera Sahara 1963 Tange Wala 1964 Baap ka Baap 1964 Shikari 1964 Inspector 1964 Shabab 1965 Koh-e-Qaaf 1965 Naela 1966 Al-hilaal 1966 Hamrahi 1966 Jalwah 1966 Mere mehboob 1966 Pail Ki Jhankar 1966 Mojza 1967 Sham savera 1967 Bahadur 1967 Sitamgar 1967 Shola aur shabnam 1968 Baalam 1968 Ik musafar ik haseena 1968 Saiqa 1969 Meri bhabi 1969 Fasana-e-dil 1970 Hamjoli 1973 Azmat 1973 Khuda te maan 1974 Jawab do 1975 Izzat 1975 Ik Gunah Aur Sahi 1975 Jub Jub Phool Khil
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Original:  They had been paired together earlier in a super-hit Pakistani film Saheli (1960) which also starred Shamim Ara and was directed by veteran film director S. M. Yousuf .
Revised:  They had been paired together earlier in a super-hit Pakistani film Saheli (1960) which also starred Shamim Ara and was directed by veteran film director S. M. Yusuf .
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Original: Pieter Rossouw de Klerk (born 21 August 1989) is a South African rugby union footballer, currently playing for Pro14 side the .
Revised: Pieter Rossouw de Klerk (born 21 August 1989) is a South African rugby union player for the in the Pro14 side the .
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Original: Pieter Rossouw de Klerk (born 21 August 1989) is a South African rugby union footballer, currently playing for Pro14 side the .
Revised: Pieter Rossouw de Klerk (born 21 August 1989) is a South African rugby union footballer, currently playing for Pro14 .
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Original: Arnoldus Francois Botha (born 26 October 1991) is a South African rugby union footballer for Irish Pro14 side Munster .
Revised: Arnoldus Francois Botha (born 26 October 1991) is a South African rugby union footballer .
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Original: Afrikaner people Category:South African rugby union players Category:South Africa international rugby union players Category:Rugby union flankers Category:Bulls (rugby union) players Category:Blue Bulls players Category:South Africa Under-20 international rugby union players Category:London Irish players Category:Munster Rugby players Category:South African expatriate rugby union players Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Ireland Category:South African expatriate sportspeople in Irela
Revised: Afrikaner people Category:South African rugby union players Category:South Africa international rugby union players Category:Rugby union flankers Category:Bulls (rugby union) players Category:Blue Bulls players Category:South Africa Under-20 international rugby union players Category:London Irish players Category:Munster Rugby playe
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Original:  He can operate either as a flanker or number 8. Return to South Africa Botha will return to South Africa to join in July 2020, if travel restrictions due to the COVID-19 pandemic allow him to do so.
Revised:  He can operate either as a flanker or number 8. Return to South Africa Botha returned to South Africa to join in July 2020, if travel restrictions due to the COVID-19 pandemic allow him to do so.
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Original:  He can operate either as a flanker or number 8. Return to South Africa Botha will return to South Africa to join in July 2020, if travel restrictions due to the COVID-19 pandemic allow him to do so.
Revised:  He can operate either as a flanker or number 8. Return to South Africa Botha will return to South Africa to join in July 2020.
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Original:  He signed a one-year contract extension with Munster in December 2018, a deal that will see him remain with the province until at least June 2020.
Revised:  He signed a one-year contract extension with Munster in December 2018.
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Original:  Category:1991 births Category:Living people Category:People from Modimolle Local Municipality Category:Afrikaner people Category:Sportspeople from Limpopo Category:South African rugby union players Category:South Africa international rugby union players Category: Rugby union flankers Category: Bulls (rugby union) players Category:Blue Bulls players Category:South Africa Under-20 international rugby union players Category:London Irish players Category:Munster Rugby playe
Revised:  Category:1991 births Category:Living people Category:People from Modimolle Local Municipality Category:Afrikaner people Category:Sportspeople from Limpopo Category:South African rugby union players Category:South Africa international rugby union players Category: Bulls (rugby union) players Category:Blue Bulls players Category:South Africa Under-20 international rugby union players Category:London Irish players Category:Munster Rugby playe
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Original:  Category:1991 births Category:Living people Category:People from Modimolle Local Municipality Category:Afrikaner people Category:Sportspeople from Limpopo Category:South African rugby union players Category:South Africa international rugby union players Category: Rugby union flankers Category: Bulls (rugby union) players Category:Blue Bulls players Category:South Africa Under-20 international rugby union players Category:London Irish players Category:Munster Rugby playe
Revised:  Category:1991 births Category:Living people Category:People from Modimolle Local Municipality Category:Afrikaner people Category:Sportspeople from Limpopo Category:South African rugby union players Category:South Africa international rugby union players Category: Rugby union flankers Category: Bulls (rugby union) players Category:Blue Bulls players Category:South Africa Under-20 international rugby union players Category:London Irish players Category:Munster Rugby players Category:Rugby union flanke
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Original:  He is a versatile forward and can play as a lock , flanker or eighthman.
Revised:  He is a versatile forward and can play as a , flanker or eighthman.
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Original: Gerrit-Jan van Velze (born 21 February 1988) is a South African rugby union footballer   .
Revised: Gerrit-Jan van Velze (born 21 February 1988) is a South African rugby union footballer Smith .
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Original:  He usually plays as an inside-centre for the team and the team . Club career he represents the in the Guinness Pro14 and the in the Currie Cup and Vodacom Cup, having previously played for the . 
Revised:  He usually plays as an inside-centre for . Club career he represents the in the Guinness Pro14 and the in the Currie Cup and Vodacom Cup, having previously played for the . 
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Original:  He usually plays as an inside-centre for the team and the team . Club career he represents the in the Guinness Pro14 and the in the Currie Cup and Vodacom Cup, having previously played for the . 
Revised:  He usually plays as an inside-centre for the team and the team . He previously played for the . 
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Original:  He usually plays as an inside-centre for the team and the team . Club career he represents the in the Guinness Pro14 and the in the Currie Cup and Vodacom Cup, having previously played for the . 
Revised:  He usually plays as an inside-centre for the team and the team . Club career he represents the in the Guinness Pro14 and the in the Currie Cup and Vodacom Cup, having previously played for . 
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Original:  He usually plays as an inside-centre for the team and the team . Club career he represents the in the Guinness Pro14 and the in the Currie Cup and Vodacom Cup, having previously played for the . 
Revised:  He usually plays as an inside-centre for the team and the team . Club career he represents the in the Guinness Pro14 and the in the Currie Cup and Vodacom Cup, having previously played for the . Club career
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Original:  He plays as a scrum-half for the   Bulls in Super Rugby and the Blue Bulls in the Currie Cup and Vodacom Cup  . He joined French Top 14 side Racing Métro for the 2013–14 Top 14 season, before joining for the 2014 Currie Cup season.
Revised:  He plays as a scrum-half for the He represented the Bulls in Super Rugby and the Blue Bulls in the Currie Cup and Vodacom Cup . He joined French Top 14 side Racing Métro for the 2013–14 Top 14 season, before joining for the 2014 Currie Cup season.
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Original: White South African people Category:Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category:Toyota Industries Shuttles players Category:South African expatriate rugby union players Category:South African expatriates in Japan Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Japan Category:Ospreys (rugby union) players Category:South African expatriates in the United Kingdom Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Wal
Revised: White South African people Category:Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category:Toyota Industries Shuttles players Category:South African expatriate rugby union players Category:South African expatriate sportspeople in Japan Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Japan Category:Ospreys (rugby union) players Category:South African expatriates in the United Kingdom Category:Expatriate rugby union players in Wal
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Original:  Leach made his Twenty20 debut on 23 June 2021, for Somerset in the 2021 t20 Blast.
Revised:  Leach made his Twenty20 debut on 23 June 2021, for Somerset in the 2021 T20 Blast.
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Original:   Given its speed and reliability in delivering information, telegraph offered opportunities for capital and military expansion.
Revised:  The telegraph worked by transmitting electrical signals over a wire laid between stations. It was the first mode of communication to eliminate the effect of distance, allowing for a near instantaneous connection. Given its speed and reliability in delivering information, telegraph offered opportunities for capital and military expansion.
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Original:   As the supply and demand of  newspaper industry rapidly increased in  nineteenth century, news agencies were established successively.
Revised:  As the supply and demand of the newspaper industry rapidly increased in nineteenth century, news agencies were established successively.
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Original:   As the supply and demand of  newspaper industry rapidly increased in  nineteenth century, news agencies were established successively.
Revised:  As the supply and demand of newspaper industry rapidly increased in the nineteenth century, news agencies were established successively.
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Original:  The French Havas Agency was founded in 1835, the German agency Wolffin  1849  and the British Reuters in 1851.
Revised:  The French Havas Agency was founded in 1835, the German agency Wolffin in 1849 and the British Reuters in 1851.
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Original:  The French Havas Agency was founded in 1835, the German agency Wolffin  1849  and the British Reuters in 1851.
Revised:  The French Havas Agency was founded in 1835, the German agency Wolffin 1849 , and the British Reuters in 1851.
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Original:  In the USA, the Radio Act of 1927 confirm its status as an advertising-funded commercial enterprise, while in Britain, the public broadcasting pioneer British Broadcasting Corporation set up in the same year.
Revised:  In the USA, the Radio Act of 1927 confirmed its status as an advertising-funded commercial enterprise, while in Britain, the public broadcasting pioneer British Broadcasting Corporation set up in the same year.
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