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Original:  The   commander of British forces in the West Indies, Lieutenant-General Sir James Leith, a veteran of the Peninsular War, promptly set out with an expeditionary force, with naval support under the command of Rear-Admiral Sir Philip Charles Durham.
Revised:  The commander of British forces in the West Indies, Lieutenant-General Sir James Leith, a veteran of the Peninsular War, promptly assembled an expeditionary force, with naval support under the command of Rear-Admiral Sir Philip Charles Durham.
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Original:  The British troops were organised into three brigades, commanded by Major-Generals Sir Charles Shipley, Stehelin and Douglass.
Revised:  The British troops were organised into three brigades, commanded by major-generals Sir Charles Shipley, Stehelin and Douglass.
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Original:  They consisted of the 1st Battalions of the 15th, 25th, 63rd Regiments of Foot ;
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Original:  They consisted of the 1st Battalions of the 15th, 25th, 63rd Regiments of Foot ;
Revised:  They consisted of the 1st Battalions of the 15th, 25th, 63rd regiments of foot ;
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Original:  Louis XVIII had appointed Admiral Charles-Alexandre Léon Durand Linois as Governor , with General Eugène Édouard Boyer de Peyreleau as his deputy.
Revised:  Louis XVIII had appointed Admiral Charles-Alexandre Léon Durand Linois as governor , with General Eugène Édouard Boyer de Peyreleau as his deputy.
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Original:  News of Napoleon's return from exile in Elba in February 1815 eventually reached the island in May, and divided the island . Linois remained loyal to the King, while Boyer-Peyreleau led the Bonapartists.
Revised:  News of Napoleon's return from exile in Elba in February 1815 eventually reached the island in May, and divided it . Linois remained loyal to the King, while Boyer-Peyreleau led the Bonapartists.
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Original:  Unfortunately , unknown to them, Bonaparte had been defeated at Waterloo on 18 June, and would abdicate soon after.
Revised:  However , unknown to them, Bonaparte had been defeated at Waterloo on 18 June, and would abdicate soon after.
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Original:  Meanwhile, on Martinique, the Governor Comte Pierre de Vaugiraud, had requested British assistance in holding the island on behalf of the French King , with British troops landing there in June.
Revised:  Meanwhile, on Martinique, the governor, Comte Pierre de Vaugiraud, had requested British assistance in holding the island on behalf of the French King , with British troops landing there in June.
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Original:  Meanwhile, on Martinique, the Governor Comte Pierre de Vaugiraud, had requested British assistance in holding the island on behalf of the French King , with British troops landing there in June.
Revised:  Meanwhile, on Martinique, the Governor Comte Pierre de Vaugiraud, had requested British assistance in holding the island on behalf of the French king , with British troops landing there in June.
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Original: The battle At dawn the next day, 8 August, the British 1st and 2nd Brigades landed at Anse Saint-Sauveur, on the south-eastern coast of Basse-Terre Island, driving the opposing French troops up into the hills.
Revised: The battle At dawn the next day, 8 August, the British 1st and 2nd brigades landed at Anse Saint-Sauveur, on the south-eastern coast of Basse-Terre Island, driving the opposing French troops up into the hills.
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Original: The Rheumatoid Arthritis Quality of Life Questionnaire (RAQoL) is a disease specific patient-reported outcome measure which determines the effect rheumatoid arthritis has on a patient’s quality of life.
Revised: The Rheumatoid Arthritis Quality of Life Questionnaire (RAQoL) is a disease-specific patient-reported outcome measure which determines the effect rheumatoid arthritis has on a patient’s quality of life.
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Original: The Cambodian genocide ( , ) was the systematic persecution and killing of Cambodians by the Khmer Rouge under the leadership of Communist Party of Kampuchea general secretary Pol Pot, who radically pushed Cambodia towards an entirely self-sufficient agrarian socialist society.
Revised: The Cambodian genocide ( ) was the systematic persecution and killing of Cambodians by the Khmer Rouge under the leadership of Communist Party of Kampuchea general secretary Pol Pot, who radically pushed Cambodia towards an entirely self-sufficient agrarian socialist society.
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Original: The Cambodian genocide () was the systematic persecution and killing of Cambodians by the Khmer Rouge under the leadership of Communist Party of Kampuchea general secretary Pol Pot, who radically pushed Cambodia towards an entirely self-sufficient agrarian socialist society.
Revised: The Cambodian genocide () was the very bad of Cambodians by the Khmer Rouge under the leadership of Communist Party of Kampuchea general secretary Pol Pot, who radically pushed Cambodia towards an entirely self-sufficient agrarian socialist society.
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Original: The Cambodian genocide () was the very bad of Cambodians by the Khmer Rouge under the leadership of Communist Party of Kampuchea general secretary Pol Pot, who radically pushed Cambodia towards an entirely self-sufficient agrarian socialist society.
Revised: The Cambodian genocide () was the systematic persecution and killing of Cambodians by the Khmer Rouge under the leadership of Communist Party of Kampuchea general secretary Pol Pot, who radically pushed Cambodia towards an entirely self-sufficient agrarian socialist society.
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Original: Pol Pot and Khmer Rouge had long been supported by the Chinese Communist Party (CCP) and CCP Chairman Mao Zedong;
Revised: Pol Pot and Khmer Rouge had long been supported by the Chinese Communist Party (CCP) and its chairman, Mao Zedong;
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Original:  The lines were not commercially successful, and the last one closed in 1675.
Revised:  The lines were not commercially successful, and the last one closed by 1675.
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Original:  Rouen was home to two of the finest doctors in France : Monsieur Doctor Deslandes and Monsieur Doctor de La Bouteillerie.
Revised:  Rouen was home to two of the finest doctors in France , Deslandes and de la Bouteillerie.
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Original:  In the first ever nonpartisan blanket primary held on November 1, 1975, Guidry was either defeated, placed into a runoff election which he then lost, or did not run again.
Revised:  In the first ever nonpartisan blanket primary held on November 1, 1975, Guidry did not run again.
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Original: In   2012, at the Former Legislators Day ceremony in the Louisiana State Capitol, Woody Jenkins, owner of the Central City News in Central in East Baton Rouge Parish, photographed many of his former colleagues, including Guidry.
Revised: In In 2012, at the Former Legislators Day ceremony in the Louisiana State Capitol, Woody Jenkins, owner of the Central City News in Central in East Baton Rouge Parish, photographed many of his former colleagues, including Guidry.
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Original: Richard P. Guidry, known as Dick Guidry (September 22, 1929 – March 26, 2014) was a businessman from Galliano, Louisiana, who was a Democrat former member of the Louisiana House of Representatives from Lafourche Parish.
Revised: Richard P. Guidry, known as Dick Guidry (September 22, 1929 – March 26, 2014) was a businessman from Galliano, Louisiana, who was a Democrat former member of the Louisiana House of Representatives for Lafourche Parish.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1970, Representative Guidry obtained designation of the South Louisiana Tidal Water Control Levee District, signed into law that year by Governor John McKeithen.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1970, Representative Guidry obtained designation of the South Louisiana Tidal Water Control Levee District, signed into law that year by Governor John McKeithen.
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Original: Guidry predicts downfall", Minden Press-Herald, Minden, Louisiana, April 30, 1975, pg. 1  Theater owner Guidry owned the Jet Drive-in Theater, located on Louisiana Highway 1 in Cut Off and the Jet Cinema in Galliano.
Revised: Guidry predicts downfall", Minden Press-Herald, April 30, 1975, pg. 1 Theater owner Guidry owned the Jet Drive-in Theater, located on Louisiana Highway 1 in Cut Off and the Jet Cinema in Galliano.
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Original: Guidry predicts downfall", Minden Press-Herald, Minden, Louisiana, April 30, 1975, pg. 1  Theater owner Guidry owned the Jet Drive-in Theater, located on Louisiana Highway 1 in Cut Off and the Jet Cinema in Galliano.
Revised: Guidry predicts downfall", Minden Press-Herald, Minden, Louisiana, April 30, 1975, pg. 1. Theater owner Guidry owned the Jet Drive-in Theater, located on Louisiana Highway 1 in Cut Off and the Jet Cinema in Galliano.
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Original:  Guidry died  on March 26, 2014, aged 84.
Revised:  Guidry died on March 26, 2014.
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Original: Richard P. Guidry, known as Dick Guidry (September 22, 1929 – March 26, 2014) was a businessman from Galliano, Louisiana, who was a Democrat former member of the Louisiana House of Representatives for Lafourche Parish.
Revised: Richard P. Guidry, known as Dick Guidry (September 22, 1929 – March 26, 2014) was an American politician and businessman who served as a member of the Louisiana House of Representatives for Lafourche Parish.
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Original:  The Hall of Fame claims that Guidry was elected to the House by a margin of seventeen votes in 1952, when he was twenty-three.
Revised:  Politics Guidry was elected to the House by a margin of seventeen votes in 1952, when he was twenty-three.
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Original:  The Hall of Fame claims that Guidry was elected to the House by a margin of seventeen votes in 1952, when he was twenty-three.
Revised:  The Hall of Fame claims that Guidry was elected to the House by a margin of seventeen votes in 1952, when he was 23.
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Original:  In 1970, Representative Guidry obtained designation of the South Louisiana Tidal Water Control Levee District, signed into law that year by Governor John McKeithen.
Revised:  In 1970, Guidry obtained designation of the South Louisiana Tidal Water Control Levee District, signed into law that year by Governor John McKeithen.
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Original:  Theater owner Guidry owned the Jet Drive-in Theater, located on Louisiana Highway 1 in Cut Off and the Jet Cinema in Galliano.
Revised:  Business Guidry owned the Jet Drive-in Theater, located on Louisiana Highway 1 in Cut Off and the Jet Cinema in Galliano.
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Original: For the Louisiana advocate of the French language, see Richard Guidryl for another Louisiana state representative, see Jesse J. Guidry.
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Original: Legacy Wright's publications were of long-lasting influence.
Revised: Legacy Wright's publications have been of lasting influence.
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Original: Wright's greatest achievement is considered to be the editing of the six-volume English Dialect Dictionary, which he published between 1898 and 1905, initially at his own expense.
Revised: Wright's greatest achievement is considered to be the editing of the six-volume English Dialect Dictionary, which he published between 1898 and 1905, partly at his own expense.
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Original:  Wright had been offered a position at a Canadian university, which would have paid him an annual salary of 500 pounds, a very generous salary at the time, but he opted to stay in Oxford and finish the Dictionary  without any financial backing from a sponsor.
Revised:  Wright had been offered a position at a Canadian university, which would have paid him an annual salary of 500 pounds, a very generous salary at the time, but he opted to stay in Oxford and finish the Dictionary . without any financial backing from a sponsor.
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Original: Life Family background Father: Yangginu ( 楊吉努 ;
Revised: Life Family background Father: Yangginu ( ;
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Original:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal grandfather: Taicu ( 台杵 ), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal uncle: Cinggiyanu ( 清佳砮 ;
Revised:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( ) Paternal grandfather: Taicu ( 台杵 ), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal uncle: Cinggiyanu ( 清佳砮 ;
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Original:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal grandfather: Taicu ( 台杵 ), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal uncle: Cinggiyanu ( 清佳砮 ;
Revised:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal grandfather: Taicu ( ), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal uncle: Cinggiyanu ( 清佳砮 ;
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Original:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal grandfather: Taicu ( 台杵 ), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal uncle: Cinggiyanu ( 清佳砮 ;
Revised:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal grandfather: Taicu ( 台杵 ), held the title of a third rank prince ( ) Paternal uncle: Cinggiyanu ( 清佳砮 ;
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Original:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal grandfather: Taicu ( 台杵 ), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal uncle: Cinggiyanu ( 清佳砮 ;
Revised:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal grandfather: Taicu ( 台杵 ), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Paternal uncle: Cinggiyanu ( ;
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Original:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ), the father of Bujai (d. 1593) Two elder brothers First elder brother: Narimbulu ( 納林布祿 ;
Revised:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( ), the father of Bujai (d. 1593) Two elder brothers First elder brother: Narimbulu ( 納林布祿 ;
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Original:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ), the father of Bujai (d. 1593) Two elder brothers First elder brother: Narimbulu ( 納林布祿 ;
Revised:  d. 1584), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ), the father of Bujai (d. 1593) Two elder brothers First elder brother: Narimbulu ( ;
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Original:  d. 1609), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Second elder brother: Gintaisi (d. 1619), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) One younger sister Second younger sister: Lady Yehe Nara, Nurhaci's secondary consort
Revised:  d. 1609), held the title of a third rank prince ( ) Second elder brother: Gintaisi (d. 1619), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) One younger sister Second younger sister: Lady Yehe Nara, Nurhaci's secondary consort
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Original:  d. 1609), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Second elder brother: Gintaisi (d. 1619), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) One younger sister Second younger sister: Lady Yehe Nara, Nurhaci's secondary consort
Revised:  d. 1609), held the title of a third rank prince ( 貝勒 ) Second elder brother: Gintaisi (d. 1619), held the title of a third rank prince ( ) One younger sister Second younger sister: Lady Yehe Nara, Nurhaci's secondary consort
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Original:  d. 1609), held the title of a third rank prince () Second elder brother: Gintaisi (d. 1619), held the title of a third rank prince () One younger sister Second younger sister: Lady Yehe Nara, Nurhaci's secondary consort
Revised:  d. 1609), held the title of a third rank prince () Second elder brother: Gintaisi (d. 1619), held the title of a third rank prince () 
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Original: Lake Charles American Press, December 19, 1963, p. 23 Despite his accomplishments, Ourso is also remembered for many controversies.
Revised: Lake Charles American Press, December 19, 1963, p. 23. Despite his accomplishments, Ourso is also remembered for many controversies.
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Original:  He was either acquitted or benefited from hung juries in all of the cases.
Revised:  He was either acquitted or benefited from hung juries in all of these cases.
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Original:  Following this Tso-ay was captured by Lieutenant Britton Davis who was accompanied by thirty scouts and some Tonto Apache 's . Davis sent a telegram to Crook notifying him of the capture of Tso-ay, and Crook requested that Davis enlist Tso-ay as a scout, if Tso-ay was willing.
Revised:  Following this Tso-ay was captured by Lieutenant Britton Davis who was accompanied by thirty scouts and some Tonto Apache . Davis sent a telegram to Crook notifying him of the capture of Tso-ay, and Crook requested that Davis enlist Tso-ay as a scout, if Tso-ay was willing.
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Original:  Tso-Ay was one of Crooks primary scouts and played a major role in leading the army into several of the strongholds the Apache had in Mexico.
Revised:  Tso-Ay was one of Crook's primary scouts and played a major role in leading the army into several of the strongholds the Apache had in Mexico.
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Original: Tso-ay, also known as "Peaches"  was a Chiricahua, Western Apache warrior, who also served as a scout for General George Crook during the Apache wars.
Revised: Tso-ay, also known as "Peaches" , was a Chiricahua, Western Apache warrior, who also served as a scout for General George Crook during the Apache wars.
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Original:  Tso-ay led Crook and his men into the upper Rio Bavispe and brought them to the camps of Chato and Benito Gray Horse .
Revised:  Tso-ay led Crook and his men into the upper Rio Bavispe and brought them to the camps of Chato and Benito .
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Original: upTso-ay 1885 Tso-ay, also known as "Peaches",  was a Chiricahua, Western Apache warrior, who also served as a scout for General George Crook during the Apache wars.
Revised:  Tso-ay, also known as "Peaches", was a Chiricahua, Western Apache warrior, who also served as a scout for General George Crook during the Apache wars.
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Original:   Before serving as a scout for the army, Tso-ay rode with Chatto in a raid.
Revised:  Early life Before serving as a scout for the army, Tso-ay rode with Chatto in a raid.
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Original:   Tso-Ay has been mentioned in Valdez is Coming, a western novel by Elmore Leonard.
Revised:  Legacy Tso-Ay has been mentioned in Valdez is Coming, a western novel by Elmore Leonard.
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Original: Tso-ay, also known as "Peaches", (c. 1853 - December 16, 1833 ) was a Chiricahua, Western Apache warrior, who also served as a scout for General George Crook during the Apache wars.
Revised: Tso-ay, also known as "Peaches", (c. 1853 - December 16, 1933 ) was a Chiricahua, Western Apache warrior, who also served as a scout for General George Crook during the Apache wars.
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Original: Tso-ay, also known as "Peaches", (c. 1853 - December 16, 1933) was a Chiricahua, Western Apache warrior, who also served as a scout for General George Crook during the Apache wars.
Revised: Tso-ay, also known as "Peaches", (c. 1853 – December 16, 1933) was a Chiricahua, Western Apache warrior, who also served as a scout for General George Crook during the Apache wars.
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Original:  He is the leading technocrat in India's National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) as its Chief Executive and Advisor.
Revised:  He is the leading technocrat in India's National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) .<ref name="PPShift"></ref
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Original:   Awards In December 2010 he was acknowledged in his individual capacity, as the "Cold Chain Personality of the Year" by an expert panel hosted by KPMG-Supply Chain Leadership Council.
Revised:  Honors and Awards In December 2010 he was acknowledged in his individual capacity, as the "Cold Chain Personality of the Year" by an expert panel hosted by KPMG-Supply Chain Leadership Council.
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Original: Pawanexh Kohli is the  Chief Executive and Advisor of India's National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) . In 2012 he was selected to help the Government of India  incubate the National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) as their founding Chief Advisor .
Revised: Pawanexh Kohli is the founding Chief Executive and Advisor of India's National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) . In 2012 he was selected to help the Government of India incubate the National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) as their founding Chief Advisor .
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Original: Pawanexh Kohli is the  Chief Executive and Advisor of India's National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) . In 2012 he was selected to help the Government of India  incubate the National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) as their founding Chief Advisor .
Revised: Pawanexh Kohli is the Chief Executive and Advisor of India's National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) . In 2012 he was selected by the Government of India incubate the National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) as their founding Chief Advisor .
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Original: Pawanexh Kohli is the  Chief Executive and Advisor of India's National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) . In 2012 he was selected to help the Government of India  incubate the National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) as their founding Chief Advisor .
Revised: Pawanexh Kohli is the Chief Executive and Advisor of India's National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) . In 2012 he was selected to help the Government of India to help incubate the National Centre for Cold-chain Development (NCCD) as their founding Chief Advisor .
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Original:  In Future, Development Focus Needs to be More on Modern Pack-Houses and Refrigerated Transport NCCD report highlights missing links in agri-logistics Community Cooling Concept by Pawanexh Kohli Post-COVID 19: Don’t go back to old ways, says ex-CEO NCCD Coronavirus pandemic | Countries must prepare sustainable logistics to deliver COVID-19 vaccine 
Revised:  In Future, Development Focus Needs to be More on Modern Pack-Houses and Refrigerated Transport NCCD report highlights missing links in agri-logistics Community Cooling Concept by Pawanexh Kohli Post-COVID 19: Don’t go back to old ways, says ex-CEO NCCD Coronavirus pandemic | Countries must prepare sustainable logistics to deliver COVID-19 vaccine Prepare now to sustainably deliver the Covid-19 vaccine
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Original:  "Challenge the Practice " encourages moving "outside the boundaries" to be innovative to make change.
Revised:  "Challenge the Process " encourages moving "outside the boundaries" to be innovative to make change.
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Original: Overview Jim Kouzes and Barry Posner started developing the idea for The Leadership Challenge when they were planned to present about leadership at a two-day conference.
Revised: Overview Jim Kouzes and Barry Posner started developing the idea for The Leadership Challenge when they were planning to present about leadership at a two-day conference.
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Original: The Leadership Challenge is a suite of leadership development content ( books, training products and assessments ) based off of the best-selling book written by James Kouzes and Barry Z. Posner, published by Wiley.
Revised: The Leadership Challenge is a suite of books, training products and assessments ) based off of the best-selling book written by James Kouzes and Barry Z. Posner, published by Wiley.
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Original: The Leadership Challenge is a suite of leadership development content ( books, training products and assessments ) based off of the best-selling book written by James Kouzes and Barry Z. Posner, published by Wiley.
Revised: The Leadership Challenge is a suite of leadership development content ( books, training products and assessments based on the book written by James Kouzes and Barry Z. Posner, published by Wiley.
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