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Original:  The warming climate may have also assisted humans in overhunting the wooly mammoth, the global warming that occurred during the end of the Pleistocene and the begging of the Holocene melted ice and allowed humans to gain accesses to more mammoth habitats than previously possible.
Revised:  The warming climate may have also assisted humans in over hunting the woolly mammoth, the global warming that occurred during the end of the Pleistocene and the begging of the Holocene melted ice and allowed humans to gain accesses to more mammoth habitats than previously possible.
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Original:  This new method may have made them able to retrieve more clear data regarding the extinction of the wooly mammoth from the geological record.
Revised:  This new method may have made them able to retrieve more clear data regarding the extinction of the woolly mammoth from the geological record.
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Original:  Previously when the two methods were used separately they yielded less clear results and obscured the answer to the question “what caused the woolly mammoths  ?”. Additionally the last few years have seen an improvement Paleoclimatic data which has also allowed scientists to draw a more clear conclusion from the existing data.
Revised:  Previously when the two methods were used separately they yielded less clear results and obscured the answer to the question “what caused the woolly mammoths ' extinction ?”. Additionally the last few years have seen an improvement Paleoclimatic data which has also allowed scientists to draw a more clear conclusion from the existing data.
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Original:  The warming climate may have also assisted humans in over hunting the woolly mammoth, the global warming that occurred during the end of the Pleistocene and the begging of the Holocene melted ice and allowed humans to gain accesses to more mammoth habitats than previously possible.
Revised:  The warming climate may have also assisted humans in over hunting the woolly mammoth, the global warming that occurred during the end of the Pleistocene and the begining of the Holocene melted ice and allowed humans to gain accesses to more mammoth habitats than previously possible.
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Original:  This new method may have made them able to retrieve more clear data regarding the extinction of the woolly mammoth from the geological record.
Revised:  This new method may have made them able to retrieve clearer data regarding the extinction of the woolly mammoth from the geological record.
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Original:  Previously when the two methods were used separately they yielded less clear results and obscured the answer to the question “what caused the woolly mammoths' extinction ?”. Additionallythe last few years have seen an improvement Paleoclimatic data which has also allowed scientists to draw a more clear conclusion from the existing data.
Revised:  Previously , the two methods were used separately they yielded less clear results and obscured the answer to the question “what caused the woolly mammoths' extinction ?”. Additionallythe last few years have seen an improvement Paleoclimatic data which has also allowed scientists to draw a more clear conclusion from the existing data.
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Original:  Previously when the two methods were used separately they yielded less clear results and obscured the answer to the question “what caused the woolly mammoths' extinction ?”. Additionallythe last few years have seen an improvement Paleoclimatic data which has also allowed scientists to draw a more clear conclusion from the existing data.
Revised:  Previously when the two methods were used separately , yielding less conclusive evidence of a human role in the extinction of the Wooly mammoth. Additionally, recent years have seen an improvement Paleoclimatic data which has also allowed scientists to draw a more clear conclusion from the existing data.
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Original:  Previously when the two methods were used separately they yielded less clear results and obscured the answer to the question “what caused the woolly mammoths' extinction ?”. Additionallythe last few years have seen an improvement Paleoclimatic data which has also allowed scientists to draw a more clear conclusion from the existing data.
Revised:  Previously when the two methods were used separately they yielded less clear results and obscured the answer to the question “what caused the woolly mammoths' extinction ?”. Additionallythe last few years have seen an improvement in Paleoclimatic data, allowing scientists to draw a more clear conclusion from the existing data.
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Original:  Previously when the two methods were used separately they yielded less clear results and obscured the answer to the question “what caused the woolly mammoths' extinction ?”. Additionallythe last few years have seen an improvement Paleoclimatic data which has also allowed scientists to draw a more clear conclusion from the existing data.
Revised:  Previously when the two methods were used separately they yielded less clear results and obscured the answer to the question “what caused the woolly mammoths' extinction ?”. Additionallythe last few years have seen an improvement Paleoclimatic data which has also allowed scientists to draw a better conclusion from the existing data.
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Original:  Previously, the two methods were used separately, yielding less conclusive evidence of a human role in the extinction of the Woolly mammoth and other plestocene Megafauna.
Revised:  Previously, the two methods were used separately, yielding less conclusive evidence of a human role in the extinction of the Woolly mammoth and other Pleistocene Megafauna.
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Original:  He was a much loved son and brother.  
Revised:  He was a much loved son and brother. " 
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Original:  "We know that Jack had a lot of friends, but we have been amazed by the amount of messages that people have left.  
Revised:  "We know that Jack had a lot of friends, but we have been amazed by the amount of messages that people have left. " 
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Original:  Jack was an angel, he was amazing.  
Revised:  Jack was an angel, he was amazing. " 
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Original:  The murder, which occurred on Wednesday evening  took place near Highridge Road in Bishopsworth, Bristol
Revised:  The murder, which occurred on Wednesday evening , took place near Highridge Road in Bishopsworth, Bristol
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Original:  They said that "Jack is obviously dearly missing by all of his family.
Revised:  They said that "Jack is obviously dearly missed by all of his family.
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Original:  Fulham pulled one back through David Healy with his long ranged effort in the 74th minute, but hopes of a comeback were dashed only minutes later when Jones received a pass at the back post and smashed the ball home  
Revised:  Fulham pulled one back through David Healy with his long ranged effort in the 74th minute, but hopes of a comeback were dashed only minutes later when Jones received a pass at the back post and smashed the ball home . 
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Original:  The win keeps Chelsea in the title hunt while city are still chasing a spot in the UEFA Cup for next season, currently in 9th place   
Revised:  The win keeps Chelsea in the title hunt while city are still chasing a spot in the UEFA Cup for next season, currently in 9th place . 
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Original:  Wigan continued to outplay their competition, and eased to victory, leaving Birmingham only one spot out of the relegation zone    
Revised:  Wigan continued to outplay their competition, and eased to victory, leaving Birmingham only one spot out of the relegation zone . 
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Original:  According to online encyclopedia Wikipedia, they "may hold a centrist viewpoint between the two parties the Democrats and Republicans%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , they may hold an extremist viewpoint that goes beyond that of either major parties, or they may have a viewpoint based on issues that they don't feel either party addresses."
Revised:  According to online encyclopedia Wikipedia, they "may hold a centrist viewpoint between the two parties %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , they may hold an extremist viewpoint that goes beyond that of either major parties, or they may have a viewpoint based on issues that they don't feel either party addresses."
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Original:  According to online encyclopedia Wikipedia, they "may hold a centrist viewpoint between the two parties the Democrats and Republicans%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , they may hold an extremist viewpoint that goes beyond that of either major parties, or they may have a viewpoint based on issues that they don't feel either party addresses."
Revised:  According to online encyclopedia Wikipedia, they "may hold a centrist viewpoint between the two parties the Democrats and Republicans%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 
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Original:  Dubbed as the "single most exciting political event of 2008", it's the first of at least two national gatherings for these often overlooked candidates, the next being in Wilkes-Barre, Pennsylvania on May 3 and 4, 2008.
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Original: Growth rate of Marburg virus in Angola.
Revised: Marburg virus
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Original: The 2008 --Anonymous101 (talk · contribs) (Note I have no link with the organization anonymous) 19:25, 5 April 2008 (UTC) Grand National at Aintree has been won by 'Compply or Die', from Ireland.
Revised: The 2008 Grand National at Aintree has been won by 'Compply or Die', from Ireland.
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Original:  The trainer for the wikking horse was D E Pipe
Revised:  The trainer for the winning horse was D E Pipe
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Original: A graph showing the approximate number of legnths behind the winner for each of the top five horses were in the Grand National 2008.
Revised: A graph showing the approximate number of lengths behind the winner for each of the top five horses were in the Grand National 2008.
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Original: The 2008 Grand National at Aintree has been won by 'Compply or Die' , from Ireland.
Revised: The 2008 Grand National at Aintree has been won by Comply or Die , from Ireland.
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Original:  The trainer for the winning horse was D E Pipe    ] 
Revised:  The trainer for the winning horse was D E Pipe . ] 
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Original:  He was  trained by D E Pipe.
Revised:  He was also trained by D E Pipe.
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Original: Today , British Prime Minister Gordon Brown will give a welcoming speech, which has already drawn criticism from other politicians for being "wholly inappropriate".
Revised: Tomorrow , British Prime Minister Gordon Brown will give a welcoming speech, which has already drawn criticism from other politicians for being "wholly inappropriate".
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Original:  The torch, which has come from Greece, will make its way around the world, being transported by thousands of people, and end in China on August 8th, 2008, to light the flame during the opening ceremony .
Revised:  The torch, which has come from Greece, will make its way around the world, being transported by thousands of people, and end in China on August 8th, 2008, to light the flame during the opening ceremony 
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Original:  4 people were also arrested today, 2 of which were on Westminster Bridge , after un-furling banners on the bridge.
Revised:  4 people were also arrested today, 2 of which were on , after un-furling banners on the bridge.
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Original: West Bromwich Albion took on the only Premier League team remaining in the FA Cup on Saturday, with Portsmouth coming out on top.
Revised:  took on the only Premier League team remaining in the FA Cup on Saturday, with Portsmouth coming out on top.
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Original: West Bromwich Albion took on the only Premier League team remaining in the FA Cup on Saturday, with Portsmouth coming out on top.
Revised: West Bromwich Albion took on the only team remaining in the FA Cup on Saturday, with Portsmouth coming out on top.
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Original: West Bromwich Albion took on the only Premier League team remaining in the FA Cup on Saturday, with Portsmouth coming out on top.
Revised: West Bromwich Albion took on the only Premier League team remaining in the on Saturday, with Portsmouth coming out on top.
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Original: West Bromwich Albion took on the only Premier League team remaining in the FA Cup on Saturday, with Portsmouth coming out on top.
Revised: West Bromwich Albion took on the only Premier League team remaining in the FA Cup on Saturday, with coming out on top.
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Original:  Pompey had defeated Manchester United 1-0 in the quarter-finals to advance to this stage, while West Brom crushed Bristol Rovers 5-1 to advance to this stage.
Revised:  Pompey had defeated Manchester United 1-0 in the quarter-finals to advance to this stage, while West Brom crushed 5-1 to advance to this stage.
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Original:  A mis-communication between defender and goalkeeper occurred after Kiely made a fine save off Milan Baros .
Revised:  A mis-communication between defender and goalkeeper occurred after Kiely made a fine save off .
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Original:  After their goal Portsmouth began to control the match, but West Brom still get their chances as Robert Koren smashes a shot off the crossbar.
Revised:  After their goal Portsmouth began to control the match, but West Brom still get their chances as smashes a shot off the crossbar.
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Original:  West Brom pushed for the equalizer near the end of the match, but the Portsmouth defense stood firm and will now await the winner of Barnsley v Cardiff to see who they will take on at Wembley in the final
Revised:  West Brom pushed for the equalizer near the end of the match, but the Portsmouth defense stood firm and will now await the winner of Barnsley v Cardiff to see who they will take on at in the final
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Original:  DC now travel to play Real Salt Lake, while Toronto will visit David Beckham and the L.A. Galaxy .
Revised:  DC now travel to play Real Salt Lake, while Toronto will visit David Beckham and the L.A. Galaxy 
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Original:  Category:Football Match Reports Category:Sports Category:Canada Category:United Stat
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Original: The loss leaves Toronto at 0-2-0 on the season, while DC pick up their first win after loosing their opener.
Revised: The loss leaves Toronto at 0-2-0 on the season, while DC pick up their first win after losing their opener.
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Original: Highways Minister Jeyaraj Fernandopullewas attending a function commemorating the Tamil New Year when a nearby explosion killed him and at least 12 others .
Revised: Highways Minister Jeyaraj Fernandopullewas attending a function commemorating the Tamil New Year .
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Original:  Over 90 were injured.
Revised:  Over 14 others were also killed in the blast.
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Original:  'Tigers' was reerring to the militant organisation, the Tamil Tigers
Revised:  'Tigers' was referring to the militant organisation, the Tamil Tigers
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Original:  "It was a suicide bombing of the Tigers, " " he said.
Revised:  "It was a suicide bombing of the Tigers, " he said.
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Original: It has been reported that,in addition to the death, 90 people were injuredin the bombings .
Revised: At least 90 people were injuredin the bombings .
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Original: It has been reported that,in addition to the death, 90 people were injuredin the bombings .
Revised: It has been reported that,in addition to the death, 90 others were injured .
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Original:  'Tigers' was referring to the militant organisation , the Tamil Tigers 
Revised:  'Tigers' was referring to the militant organization , the Tamil Tigers 
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Original: The   planned two-day meeting is being held openly in a garden belonging to one of the organizers on the outskirts of Havana.
Revised: The The planned two-day meeting is being held openly in a garden belonging to one of the organizers on the outskirts of Havana.
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Original: A rare public meeting was held by about 200 Cuban dissidents in celebration of Cuba's Independence Day on Friday.
Revised: A public meeting by Cuban dissidents was held in a rare celebration of Cuba's Independence Day on Friday.
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Original:  Although Castro did expel and refuse entry to several European observers before the meeting , police have not cracked down on the peaceful protests so far.
Revised:  Although Castro had expelled and refused entry to several European observers before the meeting , police have not cracked down on the peaceful protests so far.
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Original:  Although Castro did expel and refuse entry to several European observers before the meeting , police have not cracked down on the peaceful protests so far.
Revised:  Although Castro did expel and refuse entry to several European observers before the meeting started, police did not crack down on proptests by nearly 200 people that were peaceful so far.
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Original:  The purpose of this meetingof the "Assembly to Promote Civil Society"  was to promote peaceful change and lay groundwork to introduce democracy in Cuba.
Revised:  The meeting, called the "Assembly to Promote Civil Society" was to promote peaceful change and lay groundwork to introduce democracy in Cuba.
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Original:  The purpose of this meetingof the "Assembly to Promote Civil Society"  was to promote peaceful change and lay groundwork to introduce democracy in Cuba.
Revised:  The purpose of this meetingof the "Assembly to Promote Civil Society" , was to promote peaceful change and lay groundwork to introduce democracy in Cuba.
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Original:  Although  Castro had expelled and refused entry to several European observers before the meeting started, police did not crack down on  proptests by nearly 200 people that were peaceful so far.
Revised:  Although Castro had expelled and refused entry to several European observers before the meeting started, police did not crack down on the peaceful proptests by nearly 200 people that were peaceful so far.
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Original:  The meeting, called the "Assembly to Promote Civil Society",  was to promote peaceful change and lay groundwork to introduce democracy in Cuba.
Revised:  The meeting, called the "Assembly to Promote Civil Society", the meeting was to promote peaceful change and lay groundwork to introduce democracy in Cuba.
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Original:  The meeting was planned by several leading Cuban dissidents and former prisoners, including Martha Beatriz Roque Cabello, René Gómez Manzano and Félix Bonne Carcassés.
Revised:  Planning for the meeting was done by several leading Cuban dissidents and former prisoners, including Martha Beatriz Roque Cabello, René Gómez Manzano and Félix Bonne Carcassés.
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Original:  Controversy accompanied the meeting , and many dissidents did not attend because of invitations to some Miami, Florida groups that are said to promote violent reform.
Revised:  Controversy accompanied the event , and many dissidents did not attend because of invitations to some Miami, Florida groups that are said to promote violent reform.
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Original:  Controversy accompanied the meeting , and many dissidents did not attend because of invitations to some Miami, Florida groups that are said to promote violent reform.
Revised:  Controversy accompanied the meeting , and many dissidents did not attend because invitations to some Miami, Florida groups that are said to promote violent reform.
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Original:  Controversy accompanied the meeting , and many dissidents did not attend because of invitations to some Miami, Florida groups that are said to promote violent reform.
Revised:  Controversy accompanied the meeting , and many dissidents did not attend because of invitations to some Miami, Florida groups were thought to promote violent reform.
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Original:  Castro expressed disapproval , complaining that the opposition groups are bankrolled by the United States.
Revised:  Castro expressed disapproval of the event, complaining of opposition groups that are bankrolled by the United States.
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Original:  Previous meetings were planned as long ago as Concilio Cubano in 1996, but were cancelled due to government crackdown , arrests, and the shooting down of two planes.
Revised:  Previous meetings , planned as long ago as Concilio Cubano in 1996, but were cancelled due to government crackdown , arrests, and the shooting down of two planes.
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Original:  Previous meetings were planned as long ago as Concilio Cubano in 1996, but were cancelled due to government crackdown , arrests, and the shooting down of two planes.
Revised:  Previous meetings were planned as long ago as Concilio Cubano in 1996, were cancelled due to government crackdown , arrests, and the shooting down of two planes.
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Original:  Previous meetings were planned as long ago as Concilio Cubano in 1996, but were cancelled due to government crackdown , arrests, and the shooting down of two planes.
Revised:  Previous meetings were planned as long ago as Concilio Cubano in 1996, but were cancelled due to government crackdowns , arrests, and the shooting down of two planes.
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Original:  CNN asked Cuban President Fidel Castro about the rally , and he said, "Those who attack us don't represent more than a fraction of 1 percent. ...
Revised:  CNN asked Cuban President Fidel Castro about the rally said, "Those who attack us don't represent more than a fraction of 1 percent. ...
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Original:  You ( the foreign news media ) have helped create them."
Revised:  You the foreign news media ) have helped create them."
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Original:  You ( the foreign news media ) have helped create them."
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Original:  This is the 103rd anniversary of Cuba's independence, a day celebrated until Castro took over in 1959 and introduced the rule of Communism.
Revised:  This is the 103rd anniversary of Cuba's independence, a day that was observed with celebration until Castro took over in 1959 and introduced the rule of Communism.
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Original:  Cuban spies are probably on hand observing the action
Revised:  While ostensibly no Cuban government officers monitored the event, "government spies do regularly infiltrate dissident meetings," CNN claimed
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Original:  250px|none| Panoramic picture of Havana, Cuba The meeting was planned by several leading Cuban dissidents and former prisoners including Martha Beatriz Roque Cabello, René Gómez Manzano and Félix Bonne Carcassés.
Revised:  250px|none| The meeting was planned by several leading Cuban dissidents and former prisoners including Martha Beatriz Roque Cabello, René Gómez Manzano and Félix Bonne Carcassés.
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Original:  It is believed that around 20 - 25 arrests have been made throughout the course of the day  
Revised:  It is believed that around 20 - 25 arrests have been made throughout the course of the day . 
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Original: The torch started out at Wembley Stadium were protesters waved flags as chanted as the torch started out on it's route.
Revised: The torch started out at Wembley Stadium were protesters waved flags and chanted as the torch started out on it's route.
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Original: Image:OlympicTorchLondon.jpg|The torch makes it's way through Notting Hill, surrounded by security.
Revised: Image:OlympicTorchLondon.jpg|The torch makes its way through Notting Hill, surrounded by security.
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Original:  The torch started out at Wembley Stadium were protesters waved flags and chanted as the torch started out on it's route.
Revised:  The torch started out at Wembley Stadium where protesters waved flags and chanted as the torch started out on it's route.
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