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Original: The endonym Śfard (the name the Lydians called themselves) survives in bilingual and trilingual stone-carved notices of the Achaemenid Empire: the satrapy of Sparda (Old Persian), Saparda, Babylonian Sapardu, Elamitic Išbarda , Hebrew .
Revised: The endonym Śfard (the name the Lydians called themselves) survives in bilingual and trilingual stone-carved notices of the Achaemenid Empire: the satrapy of Sparda (Old Persian), Saparda, Babylonian Sapardu, Elamitic Išbarda .
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Original: File:Map _of_Lydia_ancient_times-en.svg |280px|Map of the Lydian Empire in its final period of sovereignty under Croesus, c. 547 BC .
Revised: File:Map of the Kingdom of Lydia.png |280px|Map of the Lydian Empire in its final period of sovereignty under Croesus, c. 547 BC .
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Original:  The language of its population, known as Lydian, was a member of the Anatolian branch of  Indo-European language family.
Revised:  The language of its population, known as Lydian, was a member of the Anatolian branch of the Indo-European language family.
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Original:  He announced to dicth ODM for TNA on 16 March 2014.
Revised:  He announced to ditch ODM for TNA on 16 March 2014.
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Original:  He announced to retire from politics on September 14, URL He  away at 10.30 pm on Thursday night of September 1, 2016.<ref>
Revised:  He announced to retire from politics on September 14, URL He passed away at 10.30 pm on Thursday night of September 1, 2016.<ref>
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Original:  He announced to retire from politics on September 14, URL He died on September 1, 2016.
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Original:  He remained in ODM (Orange Democratic Movement  and was elected to represent the Narok North Constituency in the National Assembly of Kenya since the Kenyan parliamentary election, 2007.
Revised:  He remained in ODM (Orange Democratic Movement ) and was elected to represent the Narok North Constituency in the National Assembly of Kenya since the Kenyan parliamentary election, 2007.
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Original: Elections 2013  On 4 March 2013 Elections, Henry Kosgey contested Nandi County senate seat on an ODM ticket.
Revised: Elections 2013 Elections On 4 March 2013 Elections, Henry Kosgey contested Nandi County senate seat on an ODM ticket.
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Original:   He was defeated in his bid to be elected on an ODM Party as a Nandi County Senator by a little known Stephen Sang who won United Republican Party (URP) ticket.
Revised:  He was defeated in his bid to be elected on an ODM Party as a Nandi County Senator by a famous Stephen Sang who won United Republican Party (URP) ticket.
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Original: He was defeated in his bid to be elected on an ODM Party as a Nandi County Senator by a famous Stephen Sang who won United Republican Party (URP) ticket.
Revised: He was defeated in his bid to be elected on an ODM Party as a Nandi County Senator by a infamous Stephen Sang who won United Republican Party (URP) ticket.
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Original: On 23 January 2012 the International Criminal Court pre-trial chamber II declined to confirm all of the charges levelled against Kosgey, citing insufficient prosecution evidence to sustain a full trial.
Revised: On 23 January 2012 the International Criminal Court pre-trial chamber II declined to confirm any of the charges levelled against Kosgey, citing insufficient prosecution evidence to sustain a full trial.
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Original: On 23 January 2012 the International Criminal Court pre-trial chamber II declined to confirm all of the charges levelled against Kosgey, citing insufficient prosecution evidence to sustain a full trial.
Revised: On 23 January 2012 the International Criminal Court pre-trial chamber II declined to confirm all of the charges against Kosgey, citing insufficient prosecution evidence to sustain a full trial.
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Original:  The Prosecutor alleged that Kosgey was a “ principal planner and organiser of crimes against PNU supporters .” The six men accused of inciting Kenya's post-election violence CS Monitor
Revised:  The Prosecutor alleged that Kosgey was a " principal planner and organiser of crimes against PNU supporters .” The six men accused of inciting Kenya's post-election violence CS Monitor
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Original:  The Prosecutor alleged that Kosgey was a “ principal planner and organiser of crimes against PNU supporters .” The six men accused of inciting Kenya's post-election violence CS Monitor
Revised:  The Prosecutor alleged that Kosgey was a “ principal planner and organiser of crimes against PNU supporters ". The six men accused of inciting Kenya's post-election violence CS Monitor
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Original: Elliott's second album, Da Real World, was released on June 22, 1999 , and produced the singles "She's a Bitch", "All n My Grill", and top five hit "Hot Boyz".
Revised: Elliott's second album, Da Real World, was released in 1999 , and produced the singles "She's a Bitch", "All n My Grill", and top five hit "Hot Boyz".
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Original: Elliott's second album, Da Real World, was released on June 22, 1999 , and produced the singles "She's a Bitch", "All n My Grill", and top five hit "Hot Boyz".
Revised: Elliott's second album, Da Real World, was released on June 22, 1999 and produced the singles "She's a Bitch", "All n My Grill", and top five hit "Hot Boyz".
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Original:  The remix of the latter song broke the record for most weeks at number-one on the US R&B chart on the issue dated January 15, 2000 ;
Revised:  The remix of the latter song broke the record for most weeks at number-one on the US R&B chart on the issue dated January 15, 2000 ,
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Original:  as well as spending 18 weeks at number one on the Hot Rap Singles chart , from December 4, 1999 , to March 25, 2000.
Revised:  as well as spending 18 weeks at number one on the Hot Rap Singles chart , from December 4, 1999 to March 2000.
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Original:  She embarked on her music career with R&B girl group Sista in the early-mid 1990s and later became a member of the Swing Mob collective along with childhood friend and longtime collaborator Timbaland, with whom she worked on projects for American R&B acts Aaliyah, 702, Total, and SWV. Following several collaborations and guest appearances, she launched her solo career on July 15, 1997 , with her debut album Supa Dupa Fly, which spawned the top 20 single "Sock It 2 Me".
Revised:  She embarked on her music career with R&B girl group Sista in the early-mid 1990s and later became a member of the Swing Mob collective along with childhood friend and longtime collaborator Timbaland, with whom she worked on projects for American R&B acts Aaliyah, 702, Total, and SWV. Following several collaborations and guest appearances, she launched her solo career in 1997 , with her debut album Supa Dupa Fly, which spawned the top 20 single "Sock It 2 Me".
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Original:  She embarked on her music career with R&B girl group Sista in the early-mid 1990s and later became a member of the Swing Mob collective along with childhood friend and longtime collaborator Timbaland, with whom she worked on projects for American R&B acts Aaliyah, 702, Total, and SWV. Following several collaborations and guest appearances, she launched her solo career on July 15, 1997 , with her debut album Supa Dupa Fly, which spawned the top 20 single "Sock It 2 Me".
Revised:  She embarked on her music career with R&B girl group Sista in the early-mid 1990s and later became a member of the Swing Mob collective along with childhood friend and longtime collaborator Timbaland, with whom she worked on projects for American R&B acts Aaliyah, 702, Total, and SWV. Following several collaborations and guest appearances, she launched her solo career on July 15, 1997 with her debut album Supa Dupa Fly, which spawned the top 20 single "Sock It 2 Me".
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Original:  In 2021, she was honored Monday with a star on the Hollywood Walk of Fame.
Revised:  In 2021, she was honored with a star on the Hollywood Walk of Fame.
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Original: Melissa Arnette  Elliott (born July 1, 1971) , better known by her stage name Missy Elliott, is an American rapper, singer, songwriter, and record producer.
Revised: Melissa Arnette "Missy" Elliott (born July 1, 1971) , better known by her stage name Missy Elliott, is an American rapper, singer, songwriter, and record producer.
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Original: Melissa Arnette  Elliott (born July 1, 1971) , better known by her stage name Missy Elliott, is an American rapper, singer, songwriter, and record producer.
Revised: Melissa Arnette Elliott (born July 1, 1971) is an American rapper, singer, songwriter, and record producer.
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Original: Melissa Arnette  Elliott (born July 1, 1971) , better known by her stage name Missy Elliott, is an American rapper, singer, songwriter, and record producer.
Revised: Melissa Arnette Elliott (born July 1, 1971) , better known by her stage name Missy Elliott, is an American rapper, singer-songwriter and record producer.
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Original: Melissa Arnette Elliott (born July 1, 1971) , better known by her stage name Missy Elliott, is an American rapper, singer, songwriter, and record producer.
Revised: Melissa Arnette Elliott (born July 1, 1971) is an American rapper, singer, songwriter, and record producer.
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Original: 2019–present: Recognition and Iconology On June 13, 2019, Elliot was inducted to the Songwriters Hall of Fame, becoming the first female rapper to receive this honor.
Revised: 2019–present: Recognition and Iconology On June 13, 2019, Elliott was inducted to the Songwriters Hall of Fame, becoming the first female rapper to receive this honor.
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Original:  The tune in this songis a tune from Walt Disney favourite Pinocchio.
Revised:  The melody of the song's chorus is adapted from the score of the 1940 Disney film Pinocchio.
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Original:  The guitarist is Big Jim Sullivan.
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Original:  It reached #6 on the UK Singles Chart and was a minor hit in the US, peaking at #  80 on the Billboard Hot 100 in May 1972. 
Revised:  It reached #6 on the UK Singles URL and was a minor hit in the US, peaking at # 80 on the Billboard Hot 100 in May 1972. 
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Original:  It reached #6 on the UK Singles Chart and was a minor hit in the US, peaking at #  80 on the Billboard Hot 100 in May 1972. 
Revised:  It reached #6 on the UK Singles Chart and was a minor hit in the US, peaking at # 80 on the Billboard Hot 100 in May 1972. References
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Original: "The Young New Mexican Puppeteer" is a song written by Earl Shuman and Leon URL and released as a single by Tom Jones.
Revised: "The Young New Mexican Puppeteer" is a song written by Earl Shuman and Leon Carr, and released as a single by Tom Jones.
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Original:  Chart performance It reached #6 on the UK Singles URL and was a minor hit in the US, peaking at #14 on the Easy Listening chart and #80 on the Billboard Hot 100 in May 1972.
Revised:  Chart performance It reached #6 on the UK Singles Chart, and was a minor hit in the US, peaking at #14 on the Easy Listening chart and #80 on the Billboard Hot 100 in May 1972.
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Original:  The payment clause reads "Vale por [numeric counter] que se pagarán al portador en Carácas á la presentacíon . "  ]  5 venezolanos (P-S326) 10 venezolanos (P-S327) 50 venezolanos (P-S328) 100 venezolanos (P-S329)
Revised:  The payment clause reads "Vale por [numeric counter] que se pagarán al portador en Carácas á la presentacíon " ] 5 venezolanos (P-S326) 10 venezolanos (P-S327) 50 venezolanos (P-S328) 100 venezolanos (P-S329)
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Original:  The payment clause reads "Vale por [numeric counter] que se pagarán al portador en Carácas á la presentacíon . "  ]  5 venezolanos (P-S326) 10 venezolanos (P-S327) 50 venezolanos (P-S328) 100 venezolanos (P-S329)
Revised:  The payment clause reads "Vale por [numeric counter] que se pagarán al portador en Carácas á la presentacíon . " numeric counter] 5 venezolanos (P-S326) 10 venezolanos (P-S327) 50 venezolanos (P-S328) 100 venezolanos (P-S329)
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Original: In several disciplines, lifeway is used in the sense of the ecological position of human beings within a larger ecosystem - such as a food web.
Revised: In several disciplines, lifeway is used in the sense of the ecological position of human beings within a larger ecosystem – such as a food web.
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Original:  It is studied by cultural ecology, anthropological linguistics, and cultural anthropology .
Revised:  It is studied by cultural ecology, anthropological linguistics, and .
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Original:  History  From the mid 19th century, the word was used with the meaning 'way through life' or 'way of life'.
Revised:  History Literature From the mid 19th century, the word was used with the meaning 'way through life' or 'way of life'.
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Original:  It appears  in literary contexts in the stories of Clara Lee and Rose Porter, in the verse of Frank L. Stanton, and in editor and politician Edgar Howard's opinion pieces on other political figures.
Revised:  It appears , for example, in literary contexts in the stories of Clara Lee and Rose Porter, in the verse of Frank L. Stanton, and in editor and politician Edgar Howard's opinion pieces on other political figures.
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Original:  The American Heritage Dictionary defines a lifewayas: " 1. A customary manner of living;
Revised:  Sociology The field of sociology also adopted the word 'lifeway', with one sociologist explaining that " 1. A customary manner of living;
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Original:  " Urban lifeways (trading on relationships or information, manufacturing which requires infrastructural capital at hand, etc.) are studied by urban economics but are also technically lifeways in the same sense as that of the hunter-gatherer and farmer ]  .
Revised:  " Urban lifeways (trading on relationships or information, manufacturing which requires infrastructural capital at hand, etc.) are studied by urban economics but are also technically lifeways in the same sense as that of the hunter-gatherer and farmer which] .
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Original:  He got his United States citizenship in 1983.
Revised:  He received his United States citizenship in 1983.
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Original:  In this paper, Johnson states, remarkably, that "Given such a state, it is not clear that any particle-physics testimony should be allowed in the courtroom", in reference to the dual problems that (a)
Revised:  In this paper, Johnson stated that "Given such a state, it is not clear that any particle-physics testimony should be allowed in the courtroom", in reference to the dual problems that (a)
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Original: Thefts, forgeries and restoration Many of the copies were cloned via forgery from stolen copies from various libraries, including the Vatican Library.
Revised: Thefts, forgeries and return of books Many of the copies were cloned via forgery from stolen copies from various libraries, including the Vatican Library.
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Original:   The letter was instrumental in spreading the news throughout Europe about Columbus's voyage.
Revised:  wow The letter was instrumental in spreading the news throughout Europe about Columbus's voyage.
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Original:  The high stoep (porch) around the house made the domestic worker to warn him with “Mannetjie  pasop dat jy nie daar afval nie” ("Mannetjie watch out that you don’t fall down from there").
Revised:  The high stoep (porch) around the house made the domestic worker to warn him with “Mannetjie , pasop dat jy nie daar afval nie” ("Mannetjie watch out that you don’t fall down from there").
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Original:  Follow link to see picture The Afrikaans artist Laurika Rauch has a well-known song with the title "Stuur Groete aan Mannetjies Roux" (" Send Greetings to Mannetjies Roux") and a film based on the song.
Revised:  Follow link to see picture The Afrikaans artist Laurika Rauch has a well-known song with the title "Stuur groete aan Mannetjies Roux" (" Send Greetings to Mannetjies Roux") and a film based on the song.
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Original:  Follow link to see picture The Afrikaans artist Laurika Rauch has a well-known song with the title "Stuur Groete aan Mannetjies Roux" (" Send Greetings to Mannetjies Roux") and a film based on the song.
Revised:  Follow link to see picture The Afrikaans artist Laurika Rauch has a well-known song with the title "Stuur Groete aan Mannetjies Roux" (" Greetings to Mannetjies Roux") and a film based on the song.
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Original:   In 2016, Abigail Devereaux develops signs of schizophrenia and begins seeing visions of Ben.
Revised:  In 2016, Abigail Deveraux develops signs of schizophrenia and begins seeing visions of Ben.
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Original:  Laura, with the help of Andre Dimera manage to fake Abigail's death in order to help her get through her schizophrenia.
Revised:  Laura, with the help of Andre DiMera manage to fake Abigail's death in order to help her get through her schizophrenia.
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Original:  Laura, who previously had schizophrenia is well experienced with treating the condition, helps Abigail overcome her mental setback and agrees not to tell anyone that Abigail is alive (the only other person besides Laura and Andre who knew Abigail was alive, was her mother Jennifer - it was later revealed that Laura had informed Jennifer that Abigail is alive) .
Revised:  Laura, who previously had schizophrenia is well experienced with treating the condition, helps Abigail overcome her mental setback and agrees not to tell anyone that Abigail is alive (the only other person besides Laura and Andre who knew Abigail was alive, was her mother Jennifer - it was later revealed that Laura had informed Jennifer that Abigail is alive) 
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Original:  On the 30th of May, Laura made a brief appearance in Salem .
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Original:  She also returned on May 30, 2018  for one episode.
Revised:  She also returned on May 30, 2018 , for one episode.
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Original:  On February 2, 2021, Cady McClain - who portrays Laura's daughter, Jennifer- briefly played Laura in flashbacks.
Revised:  The same month, Cady McClain briefly portrayed the role in newly-created flashbacks.
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Original: Infobox soap character | name = Laura Horton | series = Days of Our Lives | portrayer = Laura Horton is a fictional character from the NBC soap opera, Days of Our Lives, a long-running serial drama about working class life in the fictional, United States town of Salem.
Revised:  Laura Horton is a fictional character from the NBC soap opera, Days of Our Lives, a long-running serial drama about working class life in the fictional, United States town of Salem.
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Original:  Bauer's last episode aired on July 7, 1999, but she returned on May 26 to 27, 2003 , and again from June 15 to 28, 2010 , and April 10 and 11, 2013.
Revised:  Bauer's last episode aired on July 7, 1999, but she returned on May 26 to 27, 2003 ; and again from June 15 to 28, 2010 , and April 10 and 11, 2013.
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Original:  Bauer's last episode aired on July 7, 1999, but she returned on May 26 to 27, 2003 , and again from June 15 to 28, 2010 , and April 10 and 11, 2013.
Revised:  Bauer's last episode aired on July 7, 1999, but she returned on May 26 to 27, 2003 , and again from June 15 to 28, 2010 ; and April 10 and 11, 2013.
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Original:  In 1983 she recalled "When they were four feet tall, I was four foot tall.
Revised:  In 1983 she recalled "When they were three foot tall, I was four foot tall.
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Original:  When they reached four foot tall, I reached five".
Revised:  When they were four foot tall, I reached five".
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Original:  When they reached four foot tall, I reached five".
Revised:  When they reached four foot tall, I was five".
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Original: Olympic volleyball players of the United States Category:Olympic silver medalists for the United States in volleyball Category:People with Marfan syndrome Category:Deaths from aortic dissection Category:Burials at Inglewood Park Cemetery Category:Sport deaths in Japan Category:Houston Cougars women's volleyball players Category:Sportspeople from Inglewood, California Category:African-American sportswomen Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympics Category:20th-century African-American peop
Revised: Olympic volleyball players of the United States Category:Olympic silver medalists for the United States in volleyball Category:People with Marfan syndrome Category:Deaths from aortic dissection Category:Burials at Inglewood Park Cemetery Category:Sport deaths in Japan Category:Houston Cougars women's volleyball players Category:Sportspeople from Inglewood, California Category:African-American sportswomen Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympics Category:20th-century African-American people Category:20th-century American wom
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Original: Olympic silver medalists for the United States in volleyball Category:People with Marfan syndrome Category:Deaths from aortic dissection Category:Burials at Inglewood Park Cemetery Category:Sport deaths in Japan Category:Houston Cougars women's volleyball players Category:Sportspeople from Inglewood, California Category:African-American sportswomen Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympics Category:20th-century African-American people Category:20th-century American wom
Revised: Olympic silver medalists for the United States in volleyball Category:People with Marfan syndrome Category:Deaths from aortic dissection Category:Burials at Inglewood Park Cemetery Category:Sport deaths in Japan Category:Houston Cougars women's volleyball players Category:Sportspeople from Inglewood, California Category:African-American sportswomen Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympics Category:20th-century African-American people Category:20th-century American women Category:20th-century American peop
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Original: Early life and education Hyman was the second of eight children born to George W Hyman (5 July 1907- 13 July 1987) and Warrene Hyman nee Farrington ( 4 February 1927-December 1976).
Revised: Early life and education Hyman was the second of eight children born to George W Hyman (5 July 1907- 13 July 1987) and Warrene Hyman (née Farrington, 4 February 1927-December 1976).
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Original: People with Marfan syndrome Category:Deaths from aortic dissection Category:Burials at Inglewood Park Cemetery Category:Sport deaths in Japan Category:Houston Cougars women's volleyball players Category:Sportspeople from Inglewood, California Category:African-American sportswomen Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympics Category:20th-century African-American people Category:20th-century American women Category:20th-century American peop
Revised: People with Marfan syndrome Category:Deaths from aortic dissection Category:Burials at Inglewood Park Cemetery Category:Sport deaths in Japan Category:Houston Cougars women's volleyball players Category:Sportspeople from Inglewood, California Category:African-American sportswomen Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympics Category:20th-century African-American people Category:20th-century African-American women Category:20th-century American peop
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Original: He spent most of his life in Latifabad No. 8, Block C1, Hyderabada Sind, He lost his voice because of his throat cancer that was operated abroad.
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Original:   Early life and career Talish was born in Ludhiana, British India in 1926.
Revised:  Life and career Talish was born in Ludhiana, British India in 1926.
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