wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  They found that the liver expresses higher levels of the gene encoding "selenoprotein P" (SEPP1) in people with type 2 diabetes who are more insulin resistant.
Revised:  They found that the liver expresses higher levels of the gene encoding "selenoprotein P" (SEPP1) in people with type 2 diabetes – those with more insulin resistance.
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Original:  Blood levels of SEPP1 are also increased in people with diabetes compared to healthy people.
Revised:  Blood levels of SEPP1 are also increased in people with diabetes as-compared to healthy individuals.
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Original:  This new connection between SEPP1 and adipokine will be the topic of further research.
Revised:  This new connection between SEPP1 and adipokine is to be an area for further research.
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Original:  This discovery will also help in understanding plaques associated with Alzheimer's disease as researchers at Kyushu University in Fukuoka, Japan studying connection in Insulin resistance and developing plaques associated with Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  The discovery may help in understanding plaques associated with Alzheimer's disease as researchers at Kyushu University in Fukuoka, Japan studying connection in Insulin resistance and developing plaques associated with Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  This discovery will also help in understanding plaques associated with Alzheimer's disease as researchers at Kyushu University in Fukuoka, Japan studying connection in Insulin resistance and developing plaques associated with Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  This discovery will also help in understanding plaques associated with Alzheimer's disease . Researchers at Kyushu University in Fukuoka, Japan studying connection in Insulin resistance and developing plaques associated with Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  WHO estimates that 37 million people worldwide live with dementia , with Alzheimer's disease
Revised:  WHO estimates that 37 million people worldwide live with dementia and/or Alzheimer's disease
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Original:  WHO estimates that 37 million people worldwide live with dementia , with Alzheimer's disease
Revised:  WHO estimates that 37 million people worldwide live with dementia , with Alzheimer's 
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Original: Blood levels of SEPP1 are also increased in people with diabetes as-compared to healthy individuals.
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Original:  File photo/diagram of the human pancreas .
Revised:  File photo-diagram of human pancreas
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Original:  as a result, the body  unable to respond to the insulin properly.
Revised:  as a result, the body becomes unable to respond to the insulin properly.
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Original:  as a result , the body becomes unable to respond to the insulin properly.
Revised:  in other words , the body becomes unable to respond to the insulin properly.
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Original: Michael Brown Michael Brown, head  of the Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) has announced his resignation as Director of that organization.
Revised: Michael Brown Michael Brown, head douche bag of the Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) has announced his resignation as Director of that organization.
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Original: Michael Brown Michael Brown, head of the Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) has announced his resignation as Director of that organization . Brown had come under criticism for FEMA's slow reaction and handling of the devastation in New Orleans caused by Hurricane Katrina.
Revised: Michael Brown Michael Brown, head of the Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) has announced his resignation as Director . Brown had come under criticism for FEMA's slow reaction and handling of the devastation in New Orleans caused by Hurricane Katrina.
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Original:  Last week  , head of the Department of Homeland Security, Michael Chertoff relieved Brown as leader of the relief efforts in New Orleans and appointed Coast Guard Admiral Thad W. Allen in his place.
Revised:  Last week , head of the Department of Homeland Security, relieved Brown as leader of the relief efforts in New Orleans and appointed Coast Guard Admiral Thad W. Allen in his place.
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Original: Gordon Campbell, Premier of British Columbia.
Revised: File photo of Campbell, Premier of British Columbia.
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Original:  Credit: Mary McNeil British ColumbiaPremier Gordon Campbell unexpectedly announced his resignation today, calling for a leadership convention as soon as possible.
Revised:  British Columbia's Premier, Gordon Campbell, unexpectedly announced his resignation today, calling for a leadership convention as soon as possible.
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Original: The Liberal Party premier gave his resignation during an unscheduled and hastily arranged press conference at the provincial capital  just one day ahead of a caucus meeting in Vancouver characterised as an emergency meeting at the Vancouver Airport .
Revised: The Liberal Party premier gave his resignation during an unscheduled , hastily arranged, press conference at the provincial capital just one day ahead of a caucus meeting in Vancouver characterised as an emergency meeting at the Vancouver Airport .
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Original: The Liberal Party premier gave his resignation during an unscheduled and hastily arranged press conference at the provincial capital  just one day ahead of a caucus meeting in Vancouver characterised as an emergency meeting at the Vancouver Airport .
Revised: The Liberal Party premier gave his resignation during an unscheduled and hastily arranged press conference at the provincial capital . This just one day ahead of a caucus meeting in Vancouver characterised as an emergency meeting at the Vancouver Airport .
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Original: The Liberal Party premier gave his resignation during an unscheduled and hastily arranged press conference at the provincial capital  just one day ahead of a caucus meeting in Vancouver characterised as an emergency meeting at the Vancouver Airport .
Revised: The Liberal Party premier gave his resignation during an unscheduled and hastily arranged press conference at the provincial capital just one day ahead of a caucus meeting in Vancouver characterised as an emergency meeting at the Vancover airport .
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Original:  The Liberal government has been under increasing pressure since its re-election in 2009, particularly because of its introduction of a Harmonized Sales Tax weeks after it was elected on a promise to never introduce such a tax.
Revised:  The Liberal government has been under increasing pressure since its re-election in 2009.particularly contenios points include introduction of a Harmonized Sales Tax weeks after it was elected on a promise to never introduce such a tax.
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Original:  The Liberal government has been under increasing pressure since its re-election in 2009, particularly because of its introduction of a Harmonized Sales Tax weeks after it was elected on a promise to never introduce such a tax.
Revised:  The Liberal government has been under increasing pressure since its re-election in 2009, particularly because of its introduction of a Harmonized Sales Tax only weeks after their election victory with a commitment never to implement such a tax.
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Original:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million  defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  Other scandals have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million  defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  Other scandals which have dogged the party over the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million  defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year ; allegations of corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million  defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail – itself another broken campaign promise. This further aggrivated by recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million  defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk . And, the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million  defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the 6 million defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million  defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million CAD defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million  defense bills of the former government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  Other scandals which have dogged the leadership of the party in the past year , such as alleged corruption in the sale of BC Rail — which was itself another campaign promise reversal — continue to percolate powered by the recent guilty pleas and convictions of David Basi and Robert Virk and the announcement the government would pay the C 6 million defense bills of the disbraced government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original: The Liberal government has been under increasing pressure since its re-election in 2009. particularly contenios points include introduction of a Harmonized Sales Tax only weeks after their election victory with a commitment never to implement such a tax.
Revised: The Liberal government has been under increasing pressure since its re-election in 2009. Particularly contentious points include introduction of a Harmonized Sales Tax only weeks after their election victory with a commitment never to implement such a tax.
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Original:  And, the announcement the government would pay the 6 million CAD defense bills of the disbraced government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  And, the announcement the government would pay the 6 million CAD defense bills of the disgraced government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original:  And, the announcement the government would pay the 6 million CAD defense bills of the disbraced government aides as part of the plea-agreement to lesser charges
Revised:  And, the announcement the government would pay the 6 million CAD defense bills of the disbraced government aides as part of their plea-agreement to lesser charges
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Original:  This just one day ahead of a caucus meeting in Vancouver characterised as an emergency meeting at the city's airport.
Revised:  This just one day ahead of a caucus meeting characterised as an emergency meeting at the city's airport.
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Original:  This just one day ahead of a caucus meeting characterised as an emergency meeting at the city's airport.
Revised:  This just one day ahead of a caucus meeting characterised as an emergency meeting at city's airport.
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Original:  British Columbia's Premier , Gordon Campbell , unexpectedly announced his resignation today, calling for a  leadership convention as soon as possible.
Revised:  British Columbia's Premier Gordon Campbell unexpectedly announced his resignation today, calling for a leadership convention as soon as possible.
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Original:  He will remain as the Premier until such time a new leader is chosen by the party members .
Revised:  He will remain until the Liberal Party caucus members select a new leader is chosen by the party members .
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Original:  He will remain as the Premier until such time a new leader is chosen by the party members .
Revised:  He will remain as the Premier until such time a new leader .
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Original: The Liberal Party premier gave his resignation during an unscheduled, hastily arranged , press conference in Vancouver .
Revised: The Liberal Party premier gave his resignation during an unscheduled, hastily arranged press conference in Vancouver .
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Original:  This just one day ahead of a caucus meeting characterised as an emergency meeting at  city's airport.
Revised:  This just one day ahead of a caucus meeting characterised as an emergency meeting at the city's airport.
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Original:  The full party convention, planned for later this month, is to be held in Penticton.
Revised:  A full party convention, planned for later this month, is to be held in Penticton.
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Original:  Particularly contentious points include introduction of a Harmonized Sales Tax (HST) only weeks after their election victory with a  commitment never to implement HST.
Revised:  A particularly contentious point is the introduction of a Harmonized Sales Tax (HST) only weeks after their election victory with a commitment never to implement HST.
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Original:  The charge related to lost and found cash that a member of the public had handed in to the police after discovering it on a bridle path   
Revised:  The charge related to lost and found cash that a member of the public had handed in to the police after discovering it on a bridle path . 
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Original:  The calls were traced to Yeats's police-issued mobile and he was found to have researched the location of the loss and create a false address for himself  
Revised:  The calls were traced to Yeats's police-issued mobile and he was found to have researched the location of the loss and create a false address for himself . 
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Original: Police sergeant Peter Yeats, who until his arrest in September was a member of Sussex Police in England, UK, has entered a plea of guilty  to fraud by false representation.
Revised: Police sergeant Peter Yeats, who until his arrest in September was a member of Sussex Police in England, UK, entered a plea of guilty to fraud by false representation.
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Original:  Yeats was on duty in Hastings on July 19  when Lewes Police Station was given the plastic bag of money, totalling £3,500 in £20 notes.
Revised:  Yeats was on duty in Hastings on July 19 this year when Lewes Police Station was given the plastic bag of money, totalling £3,500 in £20 notes.
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Original:  He used a police computer to read about the find on an incident database and rang his own force thrice under the name Kirk Rose .
Revised:  He used a police computer to read about the find on an incident database and rang his own force three times using the name "Kirk Rose" .
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Original:  The calls were traced to Yeats's police-issued mobile and he was found to have researched the location of the loss and create a false address for himself.
Revised:  The calls were traced to Yeats's police-issued mobile . He was found to have researched the location of the loss and create a false address for himself.
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Original:  Brighton Magistrate' s Court has decided its sentencing powers are insufficient and so remanded him in custody awaiting a sentencing date to be fixed before Lewes Crown Court.
Revised:  Brighton Magistrates' Court decided its sentencing powers are insufficient and so remanded him in custody awaiting a sentencing date to be fixed before Lewes Crown Court.
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Original:  Brighton Magistrate' s Court has decided its sentencing powers are insufficient and so remanded him in custody awaiting a sentencing date to be fixed before Lewes Crown Court.
Revised:  Brighton Magistrate' s Court has decided its sentencing powers are insufficient and so remanded him in custody to be sentenced at a later date by a judge at Lewes Crown Court.
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Original:  The mission is the 133rd of the Space Shuttle Program and the 39th of Discovery  
Revised:  The mission is the 133rd of the Space Shuttle Program and the 39th of Discovery . 
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Original:  Bondevik, a former priest, has for the last four years led a centre-right coalition government consisting of the Conservative Party, the Christian Party and the Liberal Democrat 
Revised:  Bondevik, a former priest, has for the last four years led a centre-right coalition government consisting of the Conservative Party, the Christian Party and the Liberal Democrats. 
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Original: On September 12, 2005, Norway is holding its parliamentary elections.
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Original:  All that remains is the distribution of the power to the individual customers. " =
Revised:  All that remains is the distribution of the power to the individual customers. 
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Original:  When  wrong wire was cut, there was more power than the receiving stations expected all the way back to the generator.
Revised:  When the wrong wire was cut, there was more power than the receiving stations expected all the way back to the generator.
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Original: Power outage in a large portion of Los Angeles began spreading shortly before 1 :00 PST. CBS anchor Bob Schieffer reported at 1:42 PST 10 miles from downtown in Hollywood into the San Fernando Valley and to the coastline.
Revised: A power outage in a large portion of Los Angeles began spreading shortly before 1 :00 PST. CBS anchor Bob Schieffer reported at 1:42 PST 10 miles from downtown in Hollywood into the San Fernando Valley and to the coastline.
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Original:   Police are on  full tactical alert . LAX airport lost some power but emergency generators kicked in.
Revised:  Police are on " full tactical alert . LAX airport lost some power but emergency generators kicked in.
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Original:  According to DWP the shutdown was a " pro-active" shutdown associated with the   mechanical problem at two recieving stations.
Revised:  According to DWP the shutdown was a " pro-active" shutdown associated with the According to the Department of Water and Power, the shutdown happened because of a mechanical problem at two recieving stations.
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Original:  The system automatically triggered a shut down when a line was cut.
Revised:  The system automatically triggered a shutdown when a line was cut.
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Original:  DWP spokesman Ron Detaon says at 2:34 if there is an increase in the power they automatically go off.
Revised:  DWP spokesman Ron Detaon said that if there is an increase in the power they automatically go off.
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Original:  All that remains is the distribution of the power to the individual customers.  
Revised:  All that remains is the distribution of the power to the individual customers. " 
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