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Original:  Facebook, email, and instant messaging are all highlighted as commonly used, mainly because the means for communicating have become more available and even free URL While the rise in internet use among the younger population has led to fears of isolation, it is argued that the increase in use for the older population has done the exact opposite.
Revised:  Facebook, email, and instant messaging are all highlighted as commonly used, mainly because the means for communicating have become more available and free. URL While the rise in internet use among the younger population has led to fears of isolation, it is argued that the increase in use for the older population has done the exact opposite.
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Original:  URL While the rise in internet use among the younger population has led to fears of isolation, it is argued that the increase in use for the older population has done the exact opposite.
Revised:  While the rise in internet use among the younger population has led to fears of isolation, it is argued that the increase in use for the older population has done the exact opposite.
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Original:  A separate study analyzed the brain function of individuals after using the internet for a week, and found that it improved nerve function in the older group. URL
Revised:  A separate study analyzed the brain function of individuals after using the internet for a week, and found that it improved nerve function in the older group. 
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Original:  It has been determined that this age groupuses the internet on average four hours more per month than the age group 18-24, and spend a majority of their time using search engines and online shopping sites.
Revised:  It has been determined that this age group uses the internet on average four hours more per month than the age group 18-24, and spend a majority of their time using search engines and online shopping sites.
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Original:  and spend a majority of their time using search engines and online shopping URL Other sources indicate that this growing trend among the older population is due to the increase in use of social networking sites to stay in touch with family members or close friends that live far URL Studies point to Skype, Facebook, email, and instant messaging are all highlighted as commonly used, mainly because the means for communicating have become more available and free.
Revised:  and spend a majority of their time using search engines and online shopping sites. Other sources indicate that this growing trend among the older population is due to the increase in use of social networking sites to stay in touch with family members or close friends that live far URL Studies point to Skype, Facebook, email, and instant messaging are all highlighted as commonly used, mainly because the means for communicating have become more available and free.
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Original:  and spend a majority of their time using search engines and online shopping URL Other sources indicate that this growing trend among the older population is due to the increase in use of social networking sites to stay in touch with family members or close friends that live far URL Studies point to Skype, Facebook, email, and instant messaging are all highlighted as commonly used, mainly because the means for communicating have become more available and free.
Revised:  and spend a majority of their time using search engines and online shopping URL Other sources indicate that this growing trend among the older population is due to the increase in use of social networking sites to stay in touch with family members or close friends that live far away. Studies point to Skype, Facebook, email, and instant messaging are all highlighted as commonly used, mainly because the means for communicating have become more available and free.
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Original:  A separate study analyzed the brain function of individuals after using the internet for a week, and found that it improved nerve function in the older group   .
Revised:  A separate study analyzed the brain function of individuals after using the internet for a week, and found that it improved nerve function in the older group . .
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Original: Overview Yarumela was an Lenca settlement from the Middle Formative period in Mesoamerica, a period that ran from approximately: 900 BC-300BC.
Revised:  Yarumela was an Lenca settlement from the Middle Formative period in Mesoamerica, a period that ran from approximately: 900 BC-300BC.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Features of Yarumela Located sixty kilometres south of the Los Naranjos, the site of Yarumela yielded information that led archaeologists to believe that it was another imposing Middle Formative center.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Located sixty kilometres south of the Los Naranjos, the site of Yarumela yielded information that led archaeologists to believe that it was another imposing Middle Formative center.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Trade Route through Yarumela The settlement of Yarumela covered approximately 74 acres (30 hectares) of territory in the Comayagua Valley and because of its location the site exploited a major passageway between the Pacific Ocean and the Caribbean Seas.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The settlement of Yarumela covered approximately 74 acres (30 hectares) of territory in the Comayagua Valley and because of its location the site exploited a major passageway between the Pacific Ocean and the Caribbean Seas.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% El Cerrito southeastern aerial view of Yarumela The site at Yarumela yielded many large structural mounds, including the largest one which reached a height of approximately 19 metres or sixty two feet high, Structure 101, named “El Cerrito”.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The site at Yarumela yielded many large structural mounds, including the largest one which reached a height of approximately 19 metres or sixty two feet high, Structure 101, named “El Cerrito”.
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Original:  2008 Ancient Mexico%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Central America Thames Hudson Ltd.
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Original:  On the Eastern side the settlement at Yarumela was protected by the Humuya River, which was a branch off of the Ulua, and on the western side it was protected by a large man made ditch.
Revised:  On the Eastern side the settlement at Yarumela was protected by the Humuya River, which was a branch off of the Ulua, and on the western side it was protected by a large man-made ditch.
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Original: 330x330px|Estructure 102 Yarumela was one of the sites located in Honduras and based around the Middle Formative era in Mesoamerican history, occupied between 1000 BC and AD 200.
Revised:  Yarumela was one of the sites located in Honduras and based around the Middle Formative era in Mesoamerican history, occupied between 1000 BC and AD 200.
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Original:   References Evans, Susan Toby.
Revised: Also see References Evans, Susan Toby.
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Original:  It is currently open to both national and foreign public .
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Original:  Also see%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Lencan Copan History of Honduras References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Archaeological sites in Hondur
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Original:  Also see%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Lencan Copan History of Honduras References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Archaeological sites in Hondur
Revised:  Also see%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Archaeological sites in Hondur
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Original:  Also see%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Lencan Copan History of Honduras References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Archaeological sites in Hondur
Revised:  Also see%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Lencan Copan History of Honduras %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Archaeological sites in Hondur
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Original: Effects of alcohol on neurophysiology Alcohol abuse can result in brain damage which impairs working memory.
Revised: Effects of alcohol on neurophysiology Excessive alcohol use can result in brain damage which impairs working memory.
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Original: Model of working memory in interacting neural and astrocytic networks Astrocytes can modulate synaptic transmission.
Revised:  Astrocytes can modulate synaptic transmission.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Composed of two building blocks, fast-spiking neurons and slow astrocytes, this working model splits functionality using astrocytes as a pool for stored patterns.
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Original:  Several explanations have been offered for this decline in psychology .
Revised:  Several explanations for this decline in psychology .
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Original:  Several explanations have been offered for this decline in psychology .
Revised:  Several explanations have been offered for this decline have been offered .
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Original:  Drawing on the finding of general slowing of cognitive processes as people grow older, Salthouse argues that slower processing leaves more time for working-memory contents to decay, thus reducing effective capacity.
Revised:  Drawing on the finding that cognitive processes generally slow as people grow older, Salthouse argues that slower processing leaves more time for working-memory contents to decay, thus reducing effective capacity.
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Original:  Drawing on the finding of general slowing of cognitive processes as people grow older, Salthouse argues that slower processing leaves more time for working-memory contents to decay, thus reducing effective capacity.
Revised:  Drawing on the finding of general slowing of cognitive processes as people grow older, Salthouse argues that slower processing leaves more time for working memory content to decay, thus reducing effective capacity.
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Original:  However, the decline of working-memory capacity cannot be entirely attributed to slowing because capacity declines more in old age than speed.
Revised:  However, the decline of working memory capacity cannot be entirely attributed to slowing because capacity declines more in old age than speed.
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Original:  Therefore , working memory tends to be cluttered with irrelevant contents that reduce the effective capacity for relevant content.
Revised:  Therefore , working memory should tend to be cluttered with irrelevant contents that reduce the effective capacity for relevant content.
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Original:  Therefore , working memory tends to be cluttered with irrelevant contents that reduce the effective capacity for relevant content.
Revised:  Therefore , working memory tends to be cluttered with irrelevant content that reduces effective capacity for relevant content.
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Original:  Cambridge, MA: MIT Press. but, so far, it is not clear whether the decline in inhibitory ability fully explains the decline of working-memory capacity.
Revised:  Cambridge, MA: MIT Press. but, so far, it is not clear whether the decline in inhibitory ability fully explains the decline of working memory capacity.
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Original:  She argued that working memory depends to a large degree on the pre-frontal cortex, which deteriorates more than other brain regions as we grow old.
Revised:  She argues that working memory depends to a large degree on the pre-frontal cortex, which deteriorates more than other brain regions as we grow old.
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Original:  Age related decline in working memory can be briefly reversed using low intensity transcranial stimulation , synchronizing rhythms in bilateral frontal and left temporal lobe areas. Training
Revised:  Age-related decline in working memory can be briefly reversed using low intensity transcranial stimulation , synchronizing rhythms in bilateral frontal and left temporal lobe areas. Training
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Original:  Age related decline in working memory can be briefly reversed using low intensity transcranial stimulation , synchronizing rhythms in bilateral frontal and left temporal lobe areas. Training
Revised:  Age related decline in working memory can be briefly reversed using low intensity transcranial stimulation to synchronize rhythms in prefrontal and temporal areas. Training
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Original:  His pioneering study suggested that working memory can be improved by training in ADHD patients through computerized programs.
Revised:  His pioneering study suggested that working memory can be improved by training ADHD patients with computerized programs.
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Original:  This study has found that a period of working memory training increases a range of cognitive abilities and increases IQ test scores.
Revised:  This study found that a period of working memory training increases a range of cognitive abilities and increases IQ test scores.
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Original:  Another study of the same group has shown that, after training, measured brain activity related to working memory increased in the prefrontal cortex, an area that many researchers have associated with working memory functions.
Revised:  Another study by the same group has shown that, after training, measured brain activity related to working memory increased in the prefrontal cortex, an area that many researchers have associated with working memory functions.
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Original:  It has been shown in one study that working memory training increases the density of prefrontal and parietal dopamine receptors (specifically, DRD1) in test persons .
Revised:  One study has shown that working memory training increases the density of prefrontal and parietal dopamine receptors (specifically, DRD1) in test persons .
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Original:  It has been shown in one study that working memory training increases the density of prefrontal and parietal dopamine receptors (specifically, DRD1) in test persons .
Revised:  It has been shown in one study that working memory training increases the density of prefrontal and parietal dopamine receptors (specifically, DRD1) in test subjects .
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Original:  A meta-analytic summary of research with Klingberg's training program up to 2011 shows that this training has at best a negligible effect on tests of intelligence and of attention  In another influential study, training with a working memory task (the dual n-back task) has improved performance on a fluid intelligence test in healthy young adults.
Revised:  A meta-analytic summary of research with Klingberg's training program through 2011 shows that this training has at best a negligible effect on tests of intelligence and of attention In another influential study, training with a working memory task (the dual n-back task) has improved performance on a fluid intelligence test in healthy young adults.
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Original:  A meta-analytic summary of research with Klingberg's training program up to 2011 shows that this training has at best a negligible effect on tests of intelligence and of attention  In another influential study, training with a working memory task (the dual n-back task) has improved performance on a fluid intelligence test in healthy young adults.
Revised:  A meta-analytic summary of research with Klingberg's training program up to 2011 shows that this training has at best a negligible effect on tests of intelligence and of attention . In another influential study, training with a working memory task (the dual n-back task) has improved performance on a fluid intelligence test in healthy young adults.
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Original:  A meta-analytic summary of research with Klingberg's training program up to 2011 shows that this training has at best a negligible effect on tests of intelligence and of attention  In another influential study, training with a working memory task (the dual n-back task) has improved performance on a fluid intelligence test in healthy young adults.
Revised:  A meta-analytic summary of research with Klingberg's training program up to 2011 shows that this training has at best a negligible effect on tests of intelligence and of attention In another influential study, training with a working memory task (the dual n-back task) improved performance on a fluid intelligence test in healthy young adults.
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Original:  Yet , these meta-analyses agree in their estimate of the size of the effect of working-memory training: If there is such an effect, it is likely to be small.
Revised:  Yet these meta-analyses agree in their estimate of the size of the effect of working-memory training: If there is such an effect, it is likely to be small.
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Original:  Yet , these meta-analyses agree in their estimate of the size of the effect of working-memory training: If there is such an effect, it is likely to be small.
Revised:  Yet , these meta-analyses agree that if there is an effect, it is likely to be small.
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Original:  It found that there were certain places in the brain where most connectivity was decreased in pre-Huntington diseased patients, in comparison to the control group that remained consistently functional  
Revised:  It found that there were certain places in the brain where most connectivity was decreased in pre-Huntington diseased patients, in comparison to the control group that remained consistently functional . 
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Original:  On November 2, 1921, the last Al Rashid dynasty rulers surrendered Jebel Shammar to the Saudi forces.
Revised:  On November 2, 1921, the last Al Rashid dynasty rulers surrendered Jabal Shammar to the Saudi forces.
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Original: The square frame of the model in Figure 1 derives from the sociological theory of the four paradigms for the analysis of social theory.
Revised: The square model derives from the sociological theory of the four paradigms for the analysis of social theory.
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Original: The Model The square model derives from the sociological theory of the four paradigms for the analysis of social theory.
Revised: The model The square model derives from the sociological theory of the four paradigms for the analysis of social theory.
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Original:  The radical humanist paradigm is defined by a radial approach to change with an emphasis on “ transcending limitations of existing social arrangements.
Revised:  The radical humanist paradigm is defined by a radial approach to change with an emphasis on " transcending limitations of existing social arrangements.
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Original:  ” (Burrell & Morgan, 1979, p. 32).
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Original:  Taken from her 1992 publication entitled, “ From Social Abuse to Social Action: a neighborhood psychotherapy and social action project for women, ” Holland formulated her four step approach to mental health and social action for women in treatment for depression as follows:Holland, S. (1992).
Revised:  Taken from her 1992 publication entitled, " From Social Abuse to Social Action: a neighborhood psychotherapy and social action project for women, ” Holland formulated her four step approach to mental health and social action for women in treatment for depression as follows:Holland, S. (1992).
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Original:  Taken from her 1992 publication entitled, “ From Social Abuse to Social Action: a neighborhood psychotherapy and social action project for women, ” Holland formulated her four step approach to mental health and social action for women in treatment for depression as follows:Holland, S. (1992).
Revised:  Taken from her 1992 publication entitled, “ From Social Abuse to Social Action: a neighborhood psychotherapy and social action project for women, " Holland formulated her four step approach to mental health and social action for women in treatment for depression as follows:Holland, S. (1992).
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Original:  London: Routledge I. Patient on Pills At this stage, patients endorse the status-quo characterization of the “ individualized patient.
Revised:  London: Routledge I. Patient on pills At this stage, patients endorse the status-quo characterization of the “ individualized patient.
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Original:  London: Routledge I. Patient on Pills At this stage, patients endorse the status-quo characterization of the “ individualized patient.
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Original:  ” As such, they treat their disorder passively with psychotropic medication and accept the label associated with their illness.
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Original:  II. Person-to-Person Psychotherapy This stage represents the first alternative to the status-quo treatment of psychiatric disorders: talk therapy.
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Original:  III. Talking in Groups At this stage, the client is able to move past the personal challenges that are acknowledged and addressed in psychotherapy and discover that the challenges are universal amongst similarly marginalized individuals.
Revised:  III. Talking in groups At this stage, the client is able to move past the personal challenges that are acknowledged and addressed in psychotherapy and discover that the challenges are universal amongst similarly marginalized individuals.
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Original:  IV. Taking Action The final stage, as the name suggests, is the point at which the collective mobilizes to change the social structures enabling their common oppression.
Revised:  IV. Taking action The final stage, as the name suggests, is the point at which the collective mobilizes to change the social structures enabling their common oppression.
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Original:  In Holland ’ s words, “ …
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Original:  ” (Holland, 1992, p. 73).
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Original:  Examples of mental health action projects with their roots in social action psychotherapy • Women’ s Action for Mental Health (WAMH)Fenner, J. (1999).
Revised:  Examples of mental health action projects with their roots in social action psychotherapy Women' s Action for Mental Health (WAMH)Fenner, J. (1999).
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Original:  Our way: women ’ s action for mental health (Nottingham).
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Original:  Journal of Community and Applied Social Psychology, 9, 79-91 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Men’ s Advice Network (MAN)Melluish, S. & Bulmer, D. (1999).
Revised:  Journal of Community and Applied Social Psychology, 9, 79-91 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Men' s Advice Network (MAN)Melluish, S. & Bulmer, D. (1999).
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Original:  Rebuilding solidarity: an account of a men ’ s health action project.
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Original:  Journal of Community and Applied Social Psychology, 9, 93-100 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Travers (1997)Travers, K.D. (1997).
Revised:  Journal of Community and Applied Social Psychology, 9, 93-100 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Travers (1997)Travers, K.D. (1997).
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