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Original: USS Boxer Two sailors from the USS Boxer, and a Canadian man living on Queensland's Gold Coast have been sentenced to jail for bringing seven kilos of the drug  known as 'ice' (methamphetamine), valued at about AUD $1 million, into Australia in last June last year.
Revised: USS Boxer Two sailors from the USS Boxer, and a Canadian man living on Queensland's Gold Coast have been sentenced to jail for bringing seven kilos of the drug commonly known as 'ice' (methamphetamine), valued at about AUD $1 million, into Australia in last June last year.
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Original: The Iraqi parliament approves the new government - the first first full-term government since the US-led invasion in 2003 - consisting of 37 ministers which now holds members from Kurdish, Shiite and Sunni sects including Foreign Minister Hoshivar Zebari (Kurd), Deputy Prime Minister Salam Zaubai (Sunni) and Oil Minister Hussain al-Shahristani (Shia).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Several members of the Sunni factions led a walk-out before the approval of the new Cabinet after their proposal to postpone the event was turned down.
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Original:  Mr Maliki hopes that these positions will in time be filled by people not associated with any or Iraq's militia groups.
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Original: There has been an explosion in a  mine in eastern Kentucky,  in the United States killing 5 miners.
Revised: There has been an explosion in a mine in eastern Kentucky, located in the United States killing 5 miners.
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Original:  Federal Mine Safety officials say the explosion happened sometime between midnight and 1 a.m. local time Saturday   .
Revised:  Federal Mine Safety officials say the explosion happened sometime between midnight and 1 a.m. local time Saturday . .
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Original:  The names of the miners are not known  
Revised:  The names of the miners are not known . 
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Original:  Mine operators is also reqierd to keep extra oxygene packs accessible along escape ways in the mine
Revised:  Mine operators are also required to keep extra oxygene packs accessible along escape ways in the mine
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Original:  Mine operators is also reqierd to keep extra oxygene packs accessible along escape ways in the mine
Revised:  Mine operators is also reqierd to keep extra oxygen packs accessible along escape ways in the mine
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Original:  Mine operators are also required to keep extra oxygen packs accessible along escape ways in the mine  
Revised:  Mine operators are also required to keep extra oxygen packs accessible along escape ways in the mine . A temporary rule by the Mine Safety and Health Administration requiring coal operators to give miners extra oxygen was earlier issued but miners pressed Congress for a permanent legislation. 
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Original:  The explosion occurred at Darby Mine No. 1, owned by Kentucky Darby LLC and located in Harlen County.
Revised:  The explosion occurred at Darby Mine No. 1, owned by Kentucky Darby LLC and located in Harlan County.
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Original:  The try, which came in centermetres on the touchline, was converted from the sideline by Dimitri Yachvili, taking Biarritz to seven points to nil.
Revised:  The try, which came in centimeters of the touchline, was converted from the sideline by Dimitri Yachvili, taking Biarritz to seven points to nil.
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Original:  O'Gara converted the try, taking Munster to the front, leading 10 points to seven  18 minutes in.
Revised:  O'Gara converted the try, taking Munster to the front, leading 10 points to seven , 18 minutes in.
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Original:  The try, which came in centimeters of the touchline, was converted from the sideline by Dimitri Yachvili, taking Biarritz to seven points to nil.
Revised:  The try, which came in centimetres of the touchline, was converted from the sideline by Dimitri Yachvili, taking Biarritz to seven points to nil.
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Original:  Biarritz held out a Munster offense for eight minutes, before taking the ball in their own in-goal area to take the ball to their 22.
Revised:  Biarritz held out a Munster offence for eight minutes, before taking the ball in their own in-goal area to take the ball to their 22.
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Original:  May 20, 2006Biarritz19–23MunsterMillennium Stadium, Cardiff (HT: 10–17) Ref: Chris White (England) Tries:Bobo Tries:Halstead, Stringer Conversions: Yanchvili Conversions:O'Gara (2) Penalties:Yachvili (4) Penalties:O'Gara (3) Drop Goals: Drop Goals:
Revised:  May 20, 2006Biarritz19–23MunsterMillennium Stadium, Cardiff (HT: 10–17) Ref: Chris White (England) Tries:Bobo Tries:Halstead, Stringer Conversions: Yachvili Conversions:O'Gara (2) Penalties:Yachvili (4) Penalties:O'Gara (3) Drop Goals: Drop Goals:
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Original:  The pushed for the law's passage in Flordia seven years ago.
Revised:  The pushed for the law's passage in Florida seven years ago.
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Original:  According to voter registration forms, Zimmerman is Latino.
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Original:  In the United States, 24 states, including Florida, have such a law while the other 27 states do not .
Revised:  In the United States, 24 states, including Florida, have such a law .
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Original: In Florida, a person charged with second-degree murder can spend life in prison, and the charge is usually when a confrontation ends with the death one of the parties involved.
Revised: In Florida, a person charged with second-degree murder can spend life in prison, and the charge is usually the result of a confrontation that ends with the death one of the parties involved.
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Original: In Florida, a person charged with second-degree murder can spend life in prison, and the charge is usually the result of a confrontation that ends with the death one of the parties involved.
Revised: In Florida, a person charged with second-degree murder can spend life in prison, and the charge is usually when a confrontation ends with the death one of the parties involved.
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Original: Nine Peruvian miners were excavated from a collapsed mine Wednesday morning after spending six days underground.
Revised: Nine Peruvian miners were extracted from a collapsed mine Wednesday morning after spending six days underground.
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Original:  They were trapped under the Cabeza de Negro mine in southern Peru since the cave-in last Thursday.
Revised:  They were trapped under the Cabeza de Negro mine in southern since the cave-in last Thursday.
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Original:  President Ollanta Humala welcomed the miners as they ascended from the dirt.
Revised:  President welcomed the miners as they ascended from the dirt.
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Original:  "This should lead us to reflect that we have to avoid these kind of risks because the results will not always be like today," said Humala  
Revised:  "This should lead us to reflect that we have to avoid these kind of risks because the results will not always be like today," said Humala . 
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Original:  They were trapped under the Cabeza de Negro mine in southern since the cave-in last Thursday.
Revised:  They were trapped under the Cabeza de Negro mine in , since the cave-in last Thursday.
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Original:  The only source to communication and provisions including food, water, and oxygen was a tube set in place before the shaft collapsed.
Revised:  The only source of communication and provisions including food, water, and oxygen was a tube set in place before the shaft collapsed.
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Original:  President welcomed the miners as they ascended from the dirt .
Revised:  President welcomed the miners as they ascended from the mine .
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Original:  The event reinstated Humala’s efforts to govern and minimize risks of operating illegal mines . "This should lead us to reflect that we have to avoid these kind of risks because the results will not always be like today," said Humala.
Revised:  The event rekindled Humala’s efforts to govern and minimize risks of operating illegal mines . "This should lead us to reflect that we have to avoid these kind of risks because the results will not always be like today," said Humala.
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Original:   More than 50 individuals died last year in excavation tragedies in Peru's wildcat mines
Revised:  More than 50 individuals died last year in Peru's wildcat mines
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Original:  The event rekindled Humala’s efforts to convert Peru's illegal mines into government-recognized entities that could be regulated for safety . "This should lead us to reflect that we have to avoid these kind of risks because the results will not always be like today," said Humala.
Revised:  The event rekindled Humala’s efforts to convert Peru's illegal mines into government-recognized entities that could be regulated for . "This should lead us to reflect that we have to avoid these kind of risks because the results will not always be like today," said Humala.
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Original:  She wasa found and arrested at a motel in Victoria Park, Perth.
Revised:  She was found and arrested at a motel in Victoria Park, Perth.
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Original: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
Revised: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets - the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
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Original: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
Revised: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme , the sale of which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
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Original: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
Revised: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale was incongruent with Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
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Original: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
Revised: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's stance on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
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Original: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
Revised: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a pre-election move .
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Original: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election move .
Revised: Small investors will be given first chance to buy a stake in one of Australia's most unique public assets , the Snowy Hydro Scheme . Speaking ahead of the Snowy float which begins officially tomorrow, NSW Finance Minister John Della Bosca denied the sale flew in the face of Labor's position on privatisation, or that it was a strategic pre-election strategy .
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Original:  The NSW  government stands to make between $1.5 billion and $2 billion from the sale , which opens this week for investor pre-registration.
Revised:  The NSW government stands to make between $1.5 billion and $2 billion from the sale 
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Original:  The sale could raise up to $3 billion for the Victorian, New South Wales (NSW ) and federal governments.
Revised:  The sale could raise up to $3 billion for the Victorian, NSW and federal governments.
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Original:  Mr Della Bosca told the ABC  "We've looked at all sorts of arrangements to raise more capital , " he said .
Revised:  Mr Della Bosca told the ABC : "We've looked at all sorts of arrangements to raise more capital , " he said .
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Original:  Mr Della Bosca told the ABC  "We've looked at all sorts of arrangements to raise more capital , " he said .
Revised:  Mr Della Bosca told the ABC "We've looked at all sorts of arrangements to raise more capital . " he said .
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Original:  The Minister denied the privatisation was a  grab for cash      
Revised:  The Minister denied the privatisation was a " grab for cash 
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Original:  The Minister denied the privatisation was a  grab for cash      
Revised:  The Minister denied the privatisation was a grab for cash ". 
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Original: What differentiated the two candidates was leadership style : Nagin, a former cable executive  known for his maverick, straight-talking political outsider style;
Revised: What differentiated the two candidates was leadership style . Nagin, a former cable executive known for his maverick, straight-talking political outsider style;
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Original: What differentiated the two candidates was leadership style : Nagin, a former cable executive  known for his maverick, straight-talking political outsider style;
Revised: What differentiated the two candidates was leadership style : Nagin, a former cable executive is best known for his maverick, straight-talking political outsider style;
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Original:  Landrieu, a member of a prominent political family in Louisiana, emphasizing his ability to reach consensus and bring people together  .
Revised:  Landrieu, a member of a prominent political family in Louisiana, emphasized his ability to reach consensus and bring people together .
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Original:  Landrieu, a member of a prominent political family in Louisiana, emphasizing his ability to reach consensus and bring people together  .
Revised:  Landrieu, a member of a prominent political family in Louisiana, emphasizing his ability to reach consensus and bring people together during the campaign .
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Original:  It would be like Santa Claus handing a child his gifts and Christmas time and then pulling off his beard..."
Revised:  It would be like Santa Claus handing a child his gifts at Christmas time and then pulling off his beard..."
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Original: Complete with distortes guitars, a catchy chorus and "mock-demonic imagery," Lordi is reminiscent of 1970s American band Kiss - an inspiration acknowledged by lead singer Mr Lordi.
Revised: Complete with distorted guitars, a catchy chorus and "mock-demonic imagery," Lordi is reminiscent of 1970s American band Kiss - an inspiration acknowledged by lead singer Mr Lordi.
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Original: Lordi on stage A "cartoonish" band from Finland has won this year's Eurovision song contest in Athens . "Monster-themed" rock band Lordi beat 23 other competitors.
Revised: Lordi on stage A "cartoonish" band from Finland has won this year's Eurovision song contest held in Athens, Greece . "Monster-themed" rock band Lordi beat 23 other competitors.
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Original:  Lordi join the likes of Abba, Bucks Fizz, Dana and Celine Dion on the elite list of Eurovision winners . Category:Europe Category:Entertainme
Revised:  Lordi join the likes of Abba, Bucks Fizz, Dana and Celine Dion on the elite list of Eurovision winners Category:Europe Category:Entertainme
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Original:  Lordi join the likes of Abba, Bucks Fizz, Dana and Celine Dion on the elite list of Eurovision winners . Category:Europe Category:Entertainme
Revised:  Lordi join the likes of Abba, Bucks Fizz, Dana and Celine Dion on the elite list of Eurovision winners . 
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Original: The band, described as "cartoon metalheads", wearing latex monster masks and weilding spark-spewing instruments, beat runner-up Russian "heart throb" Dima Bilan.
Revised: The band, described as "cartoon metalheads", wearing latex monster masks and wielding spark-spewing instruments, beat runner-up Russian "heart throb" Dima Bilan.
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Original:    "Monster-themed" rock band Lordi beat 23 other competitors . Lordi scored 292 points from telephone voters in 38 countries with its song "Hard Rock Hallelujah" in a performance that both shocked and amused viewers.
Revised:  "Monster-themed" rock band beat 23 other competitors . Lordi scored 292 points from telephone voters in 38 countries with its song "Hard Rock Hallelujah" in a performance that both shocked and amused viewers.
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Original:    "Monster-themed" rock band Lordi beat 23 other competitors . Lordi scored 292 points from telephone voters in 38 countries with its song "Hard Rock Hallelujah" in a performance that both shocked and amused viewers.
Revised:  "Monster-themed" rock band Lordi beat 23 other competitors , scoring 292 points from telephone voters in 38 countries with its song "Hard Rock Hallelujah" in a performance that both shocked and amused viewers.
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Original:  Mr  Lordi, whose real name is Tomi Putaansuu, hails from Lapland and says his band's masked personas are just characters.
Revised:  Mr . Lordi, whose real name is Tomi Putaansuu, hails from Lapland and says his band's masked personas are just characters.
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Original:  It would be like Santa Claus handing a child his gifts at Christmas time and then pulling off his beard ...
Revised:  It would be like Santa Claus handing a child his gifts at Christmas time and then pulling off his beard …
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Original:  " Lordi join the likes of Abba, Bucks Fizz, Dana and Celine Dion on the elite list of Eurovision winners  
Revised:  " Lordi join the likes of Abba, Bucks Fizz, Dana and Celine Dion on the elite list of Eurovision winners . 
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Original: Two French special forces troops and a US soldier were among 34 combatants killed in Afghanistan in a violent upsurge in recent days.
Revised: Two French special forces troops and a US soldier were among 34 killed in Afghanistan in a violent upsurge in recent days.
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Original:  General Rahmatullah Raufi, military commander for the southern provinces, said the clash erupted when the militants ambushed a military convoy.
Revised:  General Rahmatullah Raufi, military commander for the southern provinces, said the clash erupted when militants ambushed a military convoy.
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Original:  Fears of a resurgence of the Taliban have been fuelled by a sharp rise in violence in the past few weeks, much of it in Helmand province.
Revised:  Fears of a resurgence of the Taliban have been boosted by a sharp rise in violence in the past few weeks, much of it in Helmand province.
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Original:  An American soldier is dead and six others wounded after a  clash on Friday in Uruzgan province, when a joint patrol encountered enemy fighters.
Revised:  A US soldier was killed and six others wounded after a clash on Friday in Uruzgan province, when a joint patrol encountered enemy fighters.
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Original:  An American soldier is dead and six others wounded after a  clash on Friday in Uruzgan province, when a joint patrol encountered enemy fighters.
Revised:  An American soldier is dead and six others wounded after a bloody clash on Friday in Uruzgan province, when a joint patrol encountered enemy fighters.
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Original:  An American soldier is dead and six others wounded after a  clash on Friday in Uruzgan province, when a joint patrol encountered enemy fighters.
Revised:  An American soldier is dead and six others wounded after a clash on Friday in Uruzgan province, when a joint patrol encountered Taliban fighters.
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Original:   Helmand, the main opium poppy-growing region, has become the main focus of violence.
Revised:  Helmand, the main opium poppy-growing region, has become a major focus of violence.
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Original:  During scattered clashes in the southern provinces in the past four days , around 150 people, including Taliban, Afghan police and military personnel and a few civilians, had been killed.
Revised:  Scattered clashes in the southern provinces in the past four days , around 150 people, including Taliban, Afghan police and military personnel and a few civilians, had been killed.
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Original:  During scattered clashes in the southern provinces in the past four days , around 150 people, including Taliban, Afghan police and military personnel and a few civilians, had been killed.
Revised:  During scattered clashes in the southern provinces in the past four days have killed around 150 people, including Taliban, Afghan police and military personnel and a few civilians, had been killed.
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Original:  During scattered clashes in the southern provinces in the past four days , around 150 people, including Taliban, Afghan police and military personnel and a few civilians, had been killed.
Revised:  During scattered clashes in the southern provinces in the past four days , around 150 people, including Taliban, Afghan police and military personnel and 
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Original:  At least 235 US military personnel have died in Afghanistan, Pakistan and Uzbekistan since the invasion of Afghanistan in late 2001, according to the Pentagon
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Original:  France has had 200 special forces officers in south-eastern Afghanistan since 2003 as part of the "coalition of the willing."
Revised:  France has had 200 special forces officers in south-eastern Afghanistan since 2003.
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