wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Secretary of State for Children, Schools and Families Ed Balls yesterday announced his plans to radically change the UK testing system yesterday, in parliament.
Revised:  Education secretary Ed Balls yesterday announced his plans to radically change the UK testing system yesterday, in parliament.
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Original:  Conservative Shadow Secretary of State for Children Michael Gove stated that his party have "argued for fewer national tests and more rigor and we want to work constructively to improve the assessment and qualifications regime."
Revised:  Michael Gove, an MP for the Conservative Party that serves as shadow children's secretary, stated that his party have "argued for fewer national tests and more rigor and we want to work constructively to improve the assessment and qualifications regime."
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Original:  David Laws, Shadow Secretary of State for Children for the Liberal Democrats, said that "the Sats tests taken by 14-year-olds are not only a waste of time but have been highly unreliable over the last few years.
Revised:  David Laws, children's spokesperson for the Liberal Democrats, said that "the Sats tests taken by 14-year-olds are not only a waste of time but have been highly unreliable over the last few years.
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Original: US military forces reported killing the alleged al-Qaeda second-in-command Abu Qaswarah last Sunday.
Revised: US military forces reported that the alleged al-Qaeda second-in-command Abu Qaswarah last Sunday.
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Original:  Forces killed him after a raid on an al-Qaeda command center in Mosul, Iraq    .
Revised:  Forces killed him after a raid on acommand center in Mosul, Iraq .
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Original:  Forces killed him after a raid on an al-Qaeda command center in Mosul, Iraq    .
Revised:  Forces killed him after a raid on an al-Qaeda command center in Mosul, Iraq . .
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Original:  They were  killed in the firefight and the resulting explosion of the incident, which a military spokesman called a "crazy scene".
Revised:  They were all killed in the firefight and the resulting explosion of the incident, which a military spokesman called a "crazy scene".
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Original:   The Committee recommended an amendment of the Hatch Act   
Revised:  The report recommended an amendment of the Hatch Act 
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Original: A report released by the House Committee on Oversight and Government Reform today found that the White House had "used the political affairs office to orchestrate an aggressive strategy to use taxpayer-funded trips to help elect Republican candidates for public office " during the 2006 Congressional elections.
Revised: A report released by the House Committee on Oversight and Government Reform today found that the White House had "used the political affairs office to orchestrate an aggressive strategy to use taxpayer-funded trips to help elect Republican candidates " during the 2006 Congressional elections.
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Original:  Mehlman had discussed his actions with the White House Counsel of the time, Alberto Gonzales, who approved  . Republican Representative Tom Davis, a senior member of the Committee, said that every administration since Eisenhower has done similar things.
Revised:  Mehlman had discussed his actions with the White House Counsel of the time, Alberto Gonzales, who approved of the efforts . Republican Representative Tom Davis, a senior member of the Committee, said that every administration since Eisenhower has done similar things.
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Original: A report released by the House Committee on Oversight and Government Reform today found that the White House had "used the political affairs office to orchestrate an aggressive strategy to use taxpayer-funded trips to help elect Republican candidates" during the 2006 Congressional elections.
Revised: A report released by the House Committee on Oversight and Government Reform today found that the WhiteHouse had "used the political affairs office to orchestrate an aggressive strategy to use taxpayer-funded trips to help elect Republican candidates" during the 2006 Congressional elections.
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Original:  Former Political Affairs director Ken Mehlman said during an investigative interview that it was a "big part" of his job was to "help elect allies of the President".
Revised:  Former Political Affairs director Ken Melhman said during an investigative interview that it was a "big part" of his job was to "help elect allies of the President".
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Original: Investigators also questioned Sara Taylor, a former director of Political Affairs and  Rove aid.
Revised: Investigators also questioned Sara Taylor, a former director of Political Affairs and Karl Rove aid.
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Original:  The Canadiens will continue to celebrate their 100th season all year long, with future highlights expected to be the retiring of former Habs great Patrick Roy's number 33  , and the NHL all-star game in January.
Revised:  The Canadiens will continue to celebrate their 100th year all season long, with future highlights expected to be the retiring of former Habs great Patrick Roy's number 33 , and the NHL all-star game in January.
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Original:  As well, the Canadiens are considered to be  contenders for the Stanley Cup this season, so it is possible the Bell Centre will see one more celebration in June
Revised:  As well, the Canadiens are considered to be strong contenders for the Stanley Cup this season, so it is possible the Bell Centre will see one more celebration in June
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Original:  previously calls for restraint have been issued as the military build-up in the area has continued  
Revised:  previously calls for restraint have been issued as the military build-up in the area has continued . 
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Original:  With a 2003 dispute  having seen Thailand's embassy in Phnom Penh torched, authorities deployed riot police around the building yesterday in case the dispute led to violence  
Revised:  With a 2003 dispute having seen Thailand's embassy in Phnom Penh torched, authorities deployed riot police around the building yesterday in case the dispute led to violence . 
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Original:  250px |Location of Preah Vihear Temple.
Revised:  275px |Location of Preah Vihear Temple.
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Original: A medical helicopter has crashed near Chicago, Illinois killing  the patient, a 13 month old baby girl and three crew members .
Revised: A medical helicopter has crashed near Chicago, Illinois killing the patient, a 13 month old baby girl .
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Original: The cause of the crash it not known, and there were no reported problems with the helicopter before it took off.
Revised: The cause of the crash is not known, and there were no reported problems with the helicopter before it took off.
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Original: A medical helicopter has crashed near Chicago, Illinois killing three crew members and the patient, a 13 month old baby girl.
Revised: A medical helicopter has crashed near Chicago, Illinois killing three crew members and the patient, a 13-month-old baby girl.
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Original:  The helicopter, operated by Air Angels Inc., was transporting the baby to Children's Memorial Hospital from Valley West Hospital, when it hit a wire connected to a 750 foot tall radio tower in Aurora and burst into flames around 12:00 a.m. (EDT).
Revised:  The helicopter, operated by Air Angels Inc., was transporting the baby to Children's Memorial Hospital from Valley West Hospital, when it hit a wire connected to a 750-foot radio tower in Aurora and burst into flames around 12:00 a.m. (EDT).
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Original: A medical helicopter has crashed near Chicago, Illinois killing three crew members and the patient, a 13-month-old baby girl.
Revised: A medical helicopter has crashed near Chicago, Illinois killing three crew members and the patient, a thirteen-month-old baby girl.
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Original:  These parties described the elections as nothing more than a charade   
Revised:  These parties described the elections as nothing more than a charade . 
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Original: Aliyev , faced only six opponents in a presidential election.
Revised: Aliyev faced only six opponents in a presidential election.
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Original:  None of these competitors were considered a serious competitor by the newly re-elected president   
Revised:  None of these competitors were considered a serious competitor by the newly re-elected president . 
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Original:  Ilham Aliyev in Poland Ilham Aliyev ,   has claimed that he has won 89\% of the vote in the recent Azerbaijani , elections, which were boycotted by all major oppoisition parties.
Revised:  Ilham Aliyev in Poland , has claimed that he has won 89\% of the vote in the recent Azerbaijani , elections, which were boycotted by all major oppoisition parties.
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Original:  Ilham Aliyev in Poland Ilham Aliyev ,   has claimed that he has won 89\% of the vote in the recent Azerbaijani , elections, which were boycotted by all major oppoisition parties.
Revised:  Ilham Aliyev in Poland Ilham Aliyev , has claimed that he has won 89\% of the vote in the recent Azerbaijani , elections, which were boycotted by all major opposition parties.
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Original:  "Despite the boycott by some opposition parties, the Azeris made their choice in favour of Ilham Aliyev," said Ali Akhmedov, a press spokesperson for Aliyev's "New Azerbajan," party .
Revised:  "Despite the boycott by some opposition parties, the Azeris made their choice in favour of Ilham Aliyev," said Ali Akhmedov, a press spokesperson for Aliyev's New Azerbaijan Party .
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Original:  Aliyev faced only six opponents in a presidential election.
Revised:  Aliyev faced six opponents in a presidential election.
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Original:  ]] Incumbent President of Azerbaijan, Ilham Aliyev, has claimed that victory by winning 89\% of the vote in the recent Azerbaijani presidential election, which were boycotted by all major opposition parties.
Revised:  ]] Incumbent President of Azerbaijan, Ilham Aliyev, has claimed victory by winning 89\% of the vote in the recent Azerbaijani presidential election, which were boycotted by all major opposition parties.
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Original: Aliyev faced six opponents in a presidential election.
Revised: Aliyev faced six opponents in a presiSEEMSKINDAGAYdential election.
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Original: International oil prices are sinking Thursday as investors worry that a looming global recession will lower demand.
Revised: International oil prices sank on Thursday as investors worry that a looming global recession will lower demand.
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Original: International oil prices are sinking Thursday as investors worry that a looming global recession will lower demand.
Revised: International oil prices are sinking Thursday as investors worried that a looming global recession will lower demand.
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Original:  A report released today show a massive unexpected increase in inventories.
Revised:  A report released today showed an unexpected increase in inventories.
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Original:  In China, some drivers are paying more for gas then drivers in the United States, which last occurred several years ago.
Revised:  In China, some drivers are paying more for gas than drivers in the United States, which last occurred several years ago.
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Original: According to this years edition of the World Wealth Report conducted by Merrill Lynch and Capgemini, the number of millionaires worldwide incresed by 600,000 to 8.3m in 2004.
Revised: According to this years edition of the World Wealth Report conducted by Merrill Lynch and Capgemini, the number of millionaires worldwide increased by 600,000 to 8.3m in 2004.
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Original:  At a regional level, Australia, India, Singapore, and Hong Kong were the strongest preformers - Australia added 47 new millionaires a day throughout 2004, whilst India added almost 25 a day.
Revised:  At a regional level, Australia, India, Singapore, and Hong Kong were the strongest performers - Australia added 47 new millionaires a day throughout 2004, whilst India added almost 25 a day.
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Original:  The other two workers checked the MD-82 before the failed takeoff at Madrid that killed 154 and left only eighteen survivors     
Revised:  The other two workers checked the MD-82 before the failed takeoff at Madrid that killed 154 and left only eighteen survivors . 
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Original:  The other two workers checked the  MD-82  before the failed takeoff at Madrid that killed 154 and left only eighteen survivors.
Revised:  The other two workers checked the plane, a MD-82 before the failed takeoff at Madrid that killed 154 and left only eighteen survivors.
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Original:  The other two workers checked the  MD-82  before the failed takeoff at Madrid that killed 154 and left only eighteen survivors.
Revised:  The other two workers checked the MD-82 , before the failed takeoff at Madrid that killed 154 and left only eighteen survivors.
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Original:  No reasons have been determined for these occurences .
Revised:  No reasons have been determined for these occurrences .
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Original:  The reccomendation came after the 1987 crash of Northwest Flight 255.
Revised:  The recommendation came after the 1987 crash of Northwest Flight 255.
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Original:  No-one has yet been charged
Revised:  No one has yet been charged
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Original: Three Spanair mechanics - including the head of maintenance for the airline in the area - are to be questioned under suspicion of manslaughter in connection to the Spanair Flight 5022 disaster.
Revised: Three Spanair mechanics — including the head of maintenance for the airline in the area - are to be questioned under suspicion of manslaughter in connection to the Spanair Flight 5022 disaster.
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Original: Three Spanair mechanics - including the head of maintenance for the airline in the area - are to be questioned under suspicion of manslaughter in connection to the Spanair Flight 5022 disaster.
Revised: Three Spanair mechanics - including the head of maintenance for the airline in the area — are to be questioned under suspicion of manslaughter in connection to the Spanair Flight 5022 disaster.
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Original:  Aircraft manufacturer McDonnell Douglas - who have since merged with Boeing - have suggested that operators should check the wing flaps before every flight.
Revised:  Aircraft manufacturer McDonnell Douglas —who has since merged with Boeing - have suggested that operators should check the wing flaps before every flight.
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Original:  Aircraft manufacturer McDonnell Douglas - who have since merged with Boeing - have suggested that operators should check the wing flaps before every flight.
Revised:  Aircraft manufacturer McDonnell Douglas - who have since merged with Boeing —has suggested that operators should check the wing flaps before every flight.
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Original:  No one has yet been charged 
Revised:  So far, no one has been charged with a crime. 
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Original:  Stricter Federal enforcement of immigration laws has had a substantial impact on the meat packing industry and its low wage factories where few native-born Americans are willing to work  . Employers advertise to immigrant communities, and after the immigration crackdowns the company turned to the Somali community, which was unlikely to be targeted for deportation.
Revised:  Stricter Federal enforcement of immigration laws has had a substantial impact on the meat packing industry because few native-born Americans are willing to work . Employers advertise to immigrant communities, and after the immigration crackdowns the company turned to the Somali community, which was unlikely to be targeted for deportation.
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Original:  Some of the fired Somalis fired religious discrimination complaints with the U.S. Equal Employment Opportunity Commission.
Revised:  Some of the fired Somalis filed religious discrimination complaints with the U.S. Equal Employment Opportunity Commission.
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Original: As the Muslim holy month of Ramadan approached during 2007 the Somalis requested time off to observe religious requirements .
Revised: As the Muslim holy month of Ramadan approached during 2007 the Somalis requested time off for religious reasons .
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Original:  Altogether, six government immigration raids at meat packing plants of Brazilian-owned JBS Swift & Co. had reduced 1,200 employees from the company's work force, which caused substantial production problems.
Revised:  Altogether, six government immigration raids at meat packing plants of Brazilian-owned JBS Swift & Co. had removed 1,200 employees from the company's work force, which caused substantial production problems.
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Original:  Hungary has already received a w:Euro: €5 billion credit line from the European Central Bank  . Ukraine is seeking a loan of up to US$14 billion.
Revised:  Hungary has already received a €5 billion credit line from the European Central Bank . Ukraine is seeking a loan of up to US$14 billion.
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Original:  Hungary has already received a w:Euro: €5 billion credit line from the European Central Bank  . Ukraine is seeking a loan of up to US$14 billion.
Revised:  Hungary has already received a w:Euro: €5 billion credit line from the European Central Bank (ECB) . Ukraine is seeking a loan of up to US$14 billion.
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Original:  Ukraine's yearly trade deficit has increased by almost $7 billion since last year  
Revised:  Ukraine's yearly trade deficit has increased by almost $7 billion since last year . 
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Original:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the eurozone  
Revised:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the eurozone . 
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Original:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the eurozone .
Revised:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the Eurozone .
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Original:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the Eurozone.
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Original:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the Eurozone.
Revised:  The credit line by the European Central Bank is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the Eurozone.
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Original:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the Eurozone.
Revised:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly that it has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the Eurozone.
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Original:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the Eurozone.
Revised:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other than the 15 countries that make up the Eurozone.
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Original:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 countries that make up the Eurozone.
Revised:  The credit line by the ECB is the first time publicly the ECB has extended help to countries other then the 15 that make up the Eurozone.
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Original:  The most memorably moment was Governor Sarah Palin’s speech, seen by as many Americans as Obama’s during the Democratic Convention, in which see gave an critically acclaimed performance that overshadowed McCain’s speech on the final day.
Revised:  The most memorably moment was Governor Sarah Palin’s speech, seen by as many Americans as Obama’s during the Democratic Convention, in which she gave a critically acclaimed performance that overshadowed McCain’s speech on the final day.
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Original:  The differences surrounded McCain’s differences with Obama on the surge policy in Iraq and Obama’s earlier suggestion that he would meet with leaders of rouge nations without preconditions   .
Revised:  The differences surrounded McCain’s differences with Obama on the surge policy in Iraq and Obama’s earlier suggestion that he would meet with leaders of rouge nations without preconditions . .
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Original:  The differences surrounded McCain’s differences with Obama on the surge policy in Iraq and Obama’s earlier suggestion that he would meet with leaders of rouge nations without preconditions.
Revised:  The differences surrounded McCain’s differences with Obama on the surge policy in Iraq and Obama’s earlier suggestion that he would meet with leaders of rogue nations without preconditions.
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Original:  The most memorably moment was Governor Sarah Palin’s speech, seen by as many Americans as Obama’s during the Democratic Convention, in which she gave a critically acclaimed performance that overshadowed McCain’s speech on the final day.
Revised:  The most memorable moment was Governor Sarah Palin’s speech, seen by as many Americans as Obama’s during the Democratic Convention, in which she gave a critically acclaimed performance that overshadowed McCain’s speech on the final day.
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Original:  The fire opened up at the roof of the Industrial Palace .
Revised:  The fire began at the roof of the Industrial Palace .
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Original:  Two hundred firefighters fought the fire and got it under control within less then three hours.
Revised:  Two hundred firefighters fought the fire and got it under control in less then three hours.
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Original:  Although a student music festival was organized in close surroundings, only two firefighters suffered minor injuries .
Revised:  Although a student music festival was organized in close surroundings, none were injured .
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Original:  The cause of the fire is not clear yet, media connect it to the October 9 murder of businessman Václav Kočka junior, whose father is engaged in the Incheba company , that has been leasing the exhibition grounds since 2001.
Revised:  The cause of the fire is under investigation, and could take a week to discover the cause. Press reports suggest the fire is connected to the October 9 murder of businessman Václav Kočka junior, whose father is engaged in the Incheba company , that has been leasing the exhibition grounds since 2001.
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Original:  The cause of the fire is not clear yet, media connect it to the October 9 murder of businessman Václav Kočka junior, whose father is engaged in the Incheba company , that has been leasing the exhibition grounds since 2001.
Revised:  The cause of the fire is not clear yet, media connect it to the October 9 murder of businessman Václav Kočka junior, whose father is engaged in the Incheba company and has been leasing the exhibition grounds since 2001.
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Original:  Mayor of Prague Pavel Bém promised the city will rebuilt the Palace, but refused to comment immediatelly on the view of the new or renewed building.
Revised:  Mayor of Prague Pavel Bém promised the city will rebuild the Palace, but refused to comment immediatelly on the view of the new or renewed building.
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