wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  However, the CDC found that Hispanic students had made less progress than black or white students in several key areas of reducing risky behavior.
Revised:  However, the CDC found that Hispanic students had made less progress than Black or White students in several key areas of reducing risky behavior.
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Original:  While the proportions of white and black students who had ever had sexual intercourse, and who had sex with four or more partners in their lifetime, all dropped over the period 1991-2007, there was no change in either of these statistics for the Hispanic population.
Revised:  While the proportions of White and Black students who had ever had sexual intercourse, and who had sex with four or more partners in their lifetime, all dropped over the period 1991-2007, there was no change in either of these statistics for the Hispanic population.
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Original:  Hispanic students were more likely than white or black students to go without food for 24 hours to lose weight, take drugs such as heroin or cocaine, or drink alcohol on school property, and were more likely to have avoided school on occasion because of safety concerns.
Revised:  Hispanic students were more likely than White or Black students to go without food for 24 hours to lose weight, take drugs such as heroin or cocaine, or drink alcohol on school property, and were more likely to have avoided school on occasion because of safety concerns.
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Original:  However, the CDC found that Hispanic students had made less progress than Black or White students in several key areas of reducing risky behavior .
Revised:  However, the CDC found that Hispanic students were less likely to have reduced risky behavior when compared to Black and White students in several key areas of reducing risky behavior .
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Original:  However, the CDC found that Hispanic students had made less progress than Black or White students in several key areas of reducing risky behavior .
Revised:  However, the CDC found that Hispanic students had made less progress than Black or White students in several key areas .
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Original:  Unfortunately we are not seeing that same progress among Hispanic teens for certain risk factors," said Howell Wechsler, Ed.D., MPH, director of CDC’s Division of Adolescent and School Health  
Revised:  Unfortunately we are not seeing that same progress among Hispanic teens for certain risk factors," said Howell Wechsler, Ed.D., MPH, director of CDC’s Division of Adolescent and School Health . 
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Original:  In the 2007 YRBS, over 14,000 students were surveyed from across 44 U.S. states, 5 territories, and several individual school districts , and the combined statistics used results from 39 states and 22 large urban school districts.
Revised:  In the 2007 YRBS, over 14,000 students were surveyed from across 44 U.S. states, 5 territories, and several individual school districts . The combined statistics used results from 39 states and 22 large urban school districts.
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Original:  Males were also more likely to have smoked tobacco or marijuana, engaged in heavy drinking, or engaged in sexual intercourse, although females were more likely to have fasted for 24 hours or more, vomited or taken laxatives in order to lose weight.
Revised:  Males were also more likely to have smoked tobacco or marijuana, engaged in heavy drinking, or engaged in sexual intercourse, while females were more likely to have fasted for 24 hours or more, vomited or taken laxatives in order to lose weight.
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Original: ]] While the proportions of White and Black students who had ever had sexual intercourse, and who had  sex with four or more partners in their lifetime , all dropped over the period 1991-2007, there was no change in either of these statistics for the Hispanic population.
Revised: ]] While the proportions of White and Black students who had ever had sexual intercourse, and who had had sex with four or more partners in their lifetime , all dropped over the period 1991-2007, there was no change in either of these statistics for the Hispanic population.
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Original: ]] While the proportions of White and Black students who had ever had sexual intercourse, and who had  sex with four or more partners in their lifetime , all dropped over the period 1991-2007, there was no change in either of these statistics for the Hispanic population.
Revised: ]] While the proportions of White and Black students who had ever had sexual intercourse, and who had sex with four or more partners in their lifetimes , all dropped over the period 1991-2007, there was no change in either of these statistics for the Hispanic population.
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Original:  Compared to their 1990s counterparts , however, Hispanic students in 2007 were found to be more likely to have used a condom during their most recent sexual intercourse, and less likely to have consumed drugs such as cigarettes, alcohol , or marijuana.
Revised:  Compared to their counterparts in the 1990s however, Hispanic students in 2007 were found to be more likely to have used a condom during their most recent sexual intercourse, and less likely to have consumed drugs such as cigarettes, alcohol , or marijuana.
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Original:  Compared to their 1990s counterparts , however, Hispanic students in 2007 were found to be more likely to have used a condom during their most recent sexual intercourse, and less likely to have consumed drugs such as cigarettes, alcohol , or marijuana.
Revised:  Compared to their 1990s counterparts , however, Hispanic students in 2007 were found to be more likely to have used a condom during their most recent sexual intercourse, and less likely to have consumed drugs such as cigarettes, alcohol and marijuana.
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Original:  Hispanic students were more likely than White or Black students to go without food for 24 hours to lose weight,  take drugs such as heroin or cocaine, or drink alcohol on school property, and were more likely to have avoided school on occasion because of safety concerns.
Revised:  Hispanic students were more likely than White or Black students to go without food for 24 hours to lose weight, to take drugs such as heroin or cocaine, or drink alcohol on school property, and were more likely to have avoided school on occasion because of safety concerns.
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Original:  Hispanic students were more likely than White or Black students to go without food for 24 hours to lose weight,  take drugs such as heroin or cocaine, or drink alcohol on school property, and were more likely to have avoided school on occasion because of safety concerns.
Revised:  Hispanic students were more likely than White or Black students to go without food for 24 hours to lose weight, take drugs such as heroin or cocaine, to drink alcohol on school property, and were more likely to have avoided school on occasion because of safety concerns.
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Original:  Hispanic students were more likely than White or Black students to go without food for 24 hours to lose weight,  take drugs such as heroin or cocaine, or drink alcohol on school property, and were more likely to have avoided school on occasion because of safety concerns.
Revised:  Hispanic students were more likely than White or Black students to go without food for 24 hours to lose weight, take drugs such as heroin or cocaine, or drink alcohol on school property, and to have avoided school on occasion because of safety concerns.
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Original:  In comparisons with previous YRBS results, the survey found that the percentage of students who had ever had sexual intercourse decreased from 54.1\% in 1991 to 47.8\% in 2007, with a comparable decrease in the percentage who had had four or more sexual partners, from 18.7\% to 14.9\%.
Revised:  In comparison with previous YRBS results, the survey found that the percentage of students who had ever had sexual intercourse decreased from 54.1\% in 1991 to 47.8\% in 2007, with a comparable decrease in the percentage who had had four or more sexual partners, from 18.7\% to 14.9\%.
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Original:  Knight, who according to Forbes gave no reason for his departure, intends to retain his position as the chairman of Nike's board of directors.
Revised: According to ESPN, Knight was responsible for Nike's endorsement contract with Michael Jordan, signed in 1984 when he was still a rookie with the Chicago Bulls. Jordan said of Knight, "To me, Phil Knight will always be recognized as a sports marketing visionary -- he will always be a part of Nike. I learned so much about the industry from him and will always admire his drive and creativity." Knight, who according to Forbes gave no reason for his departure, intends to retain his position as the chairman of Nike's board of directors.
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Original: November 18, 2004, San Francisco.
Revised: November 18, 2004.
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Original: November 18, 2004, Beaverton, Ore. Reuters has reported that Philip Knight, co-founder of shoe giant Nike, Inc. will step down as the company's CEO and President on December 28.
Revised:  Reuters has reported that Philip Knight, co-founder of shoe giant Nike, Inc. will step down as the company's CEO and President on December 28.
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Original: Father Mother Legitimacy Acknowledgement Japan's nationality is any Japanese no needless automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no before birth automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no after birth depending on naturalization. non-Japanese Japanese yes after birth acquired by notification.
Revised: Father Mother Legitimacy Acknowledgement Japan's nationality is any Japanese no needless automatically granted by birth. Japanese non-Japanese no before birth automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no after birth depending on naturalization. non-Japanese Japanese yes after birth acquired by notification.
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Original: Father Mother Legitimacy Acknowledgement Japan's nationality is any Japanese no needless automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no before birth automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no after birth depending on naturalization. non-Japanese Japanese yes after birth acquired by notification.
Revised: Father Mother Legitimacy Acknowledgement Japan's nationality is any Japanese no needless automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no before birth automatically granted by birth. Japanese non-Japanese no after birth depending on naturalization. non-Japanese Japanese yes after birth acquired by notification.
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Original: Father Mother Legitimacy Acknowledgement Japan's nationality is any Japanese no needless automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no before birth automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no after birth depending on naturalization. non-Japanese Japanese yes after birth acquired by notification.
Revised: Father Mother Legitimacy Acknowledgement Japan's nationality is any Japanese no needless automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no before birth automatically granted by birth. non-Japanese Japanese no after birth depending on naturalization. Japanese non-Japanese yes after birth acquired by notification.
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Original: Japan's Supreme Court ruled  that a condition imposed by an Act which hinders the plaintiffs of foreign children from acquiring Japan's nationality is unconstitutional . Each of the ten plaintiffs was born of a Filipino mother and later acknowledged by a Japanese father.
Revised: Japan's Supreme Court ruled that a condition imposed by Act on nationality is unconstitutional, and assured the children plaintiffs of Japan's nationality is unconstitutional . Each of the ten plaintiffs was born of a Filipino mother and later acknowledged by a Japanese father.
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Original: Japan's Supreme Court ruled  that a condition imposed by an Act which hinders the plaintiffs of foreign children from acquiring Japan's nationality is unconstitutional . Each of the ten plaintiffs was born of a Filipino mother and later acknowledged by a Japanese father.
Revised: Japan's Supreme Court ruled that a condition imposed by an Act which hinders the plaintiffs of foreign children from acquiring Japan's nationality . Each of the ten plaintiffs was born of a Filipino mother and later acknowledged by a Japanese father.
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Original:  Because the parents didn't legally marry, the government rejected the children's claims for Japan's nationality filed between 2003 and 2005.
Revised:  They had filed claims for Japan's nationality filed between 2003 and 2005.
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Original:  Because the parents didn't legally marry, the government rejected the children's claims for Japan's nationality filed between 2003 and 2005.
Revised:  Because the parents didn't legally marry, the government rejected the children's claims for Japan's nationality between 2003 and 2005.
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Original:  A Japan's Act on nationality provides that a non-Japanese child (under 20)
Revised:  According to Japan's Act on nationality provides that a non-Japanese child (under 20)
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Original:  A Japan's Act on nationality provides that a non-Japanese child (under 20)
Revised:  A Japan's Act on nationality , a non-Japanese child (under 20)
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Original:  4 June, 2008 that the condition of  legitimacy by marriage  is resulting in unreasonable distinctions to violate Article 14 of the Constitution of Japan, which guarantees equality under the law , and certified Japan's nationality of the plaintiffs according to the rest of this provision .
Revised:  4 June, 2008 that the condition of ' legitimacy by marriage is resulting in unreasonable distinctions to violate Article 14 of the Constitution of Japan, which guarantees equality under the law , and certified Japan's nationality of the plaintiffs according to the rest of this provision .
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Original:  4 June, 2008 that the condition of  legitimacy by marriage  is resulting in unreasonable distinctions to violate Article 14 of the Constitution of Japan, which guarantees equality under the law , and certified Japan's nationality of the plaintiffs according to the rest of this provision .
Revised:  4 June, 2008 that the condition of legitimacy by marriage ' is resulting in unreasonable distinctions to violate Article 14 of the Constitution of Japan, which guarantees equality under the law , and certified Japan's nationality of the plaintiffs according to the rest of this provision .
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Original:  4 June, 2008 that the condition of  legitimacy by marriage  is resulting in unreasonable distinctions to violate Article 14 of the Constitution of Japan, which guarantees equality under the law , and certified Japan's nationality of the plaintiffs according to the rest of this provision .
Revised:  4 June, 2008 that the condition of legitimacy by marriage is resulting in unreasonable distinctions to violate Article 14 of the Constitution of Japan, which guarantees equality under the law , and certified Japan's nationality .
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Original:  There are estimated to be tens of thousands of children in Japan and overseas under similar situations .
Revised:  There are estimated to be tens of thousands of children in similar situations in Japan and a considerable number overseas .
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Original:  The judgment also referred to two conventions (see (f) below) which Japan has ratified.
Revised:  The judgment also referred to two conventions which Japan has ratified.
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Original:  examining the content in detail, we want to  consider how to react."
Revised:  examining the content in detail, we want to examine its content in detail and consider how to react."
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Original:  He also said , " Just hearing of it, I have an impression  that it's a reasonable judgment.
Revised:  He added , " Just hearing of it, I have an impression that it's a reasonable judgment.
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Original:  He also said , " Just hearing of it, I have an impression  that it's a reasonable judgment.
Revised:  He also said , " I have an impression that it's a reasonable judgment.
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Original:  He also said , " Just hearing of it, I have an impression  that it's a reasonable judgment.
Revised:  He also said , " Just hearing of it, I have an impression , just hearing of it, that it's a reasonable judgment.
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Original:  Japanese non-Japanese no before birth automatically granted by birth.
Revised:  Japanese non-Japanese not legally married before birth automatically granted by birth.
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Original:  The ten plaintiffs filed the appeal through lawyers after Tokyo High Court dismissed their claim in February, 2007.
Revised:  The ten plaintiffs filed their appeal through lawyers after Tokyo High Court dismissed their claim in February, 2007.
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Original:  The Wednesday's judgment was concluded as a major opinion of 10 among 15 judges.
Revised:  The Wednesday's judgment was a major opinion of 10 among 15 judges.
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Original: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition by this provision within discretion of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
Revised: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition in this provision within discretion of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
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Original: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition by this provision within discretion of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
Revised: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition by this provision within the scope of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
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Original: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition by this provision within discretion of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
Revised: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition by this provision within discretion of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within the scope of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
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Original: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition by this provision within discretion of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
Revised: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition by this provision within discretion of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within the scope of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
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Original: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition by this provision within discretion of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
Revised: by legitimacy is This distinction is caused by Removing this condition is Majority 9 unconstitutional an excessive condition by this provision within discretion of the Judiciary Majority 1 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Judiciary Opposites 2 unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within discretion of the Legislation Opposites 3 not unconstitutional non-existence of a provision within the scope of the Legislation The judgment is to say:
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Original:  (a) while it's within discretion of the Legislation  how conditions are set for acquiring / losing Japan's nationality (Article 10), a distinction without rational reasons brought by such a condition may be unconstitutional (Article 14: Paragraph 1).
Revised:  (a) while it's within the scope of the Legislation how conditions are set for acquiring / losing Japan's nationality (Article 10), a distinction without rational reasons brought by such a condition may be unconstitutional (Article 14: Paragraph 1).
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Original:  (b) being legitimated by the parents' marriage or not is the thing the child can not change by its will or endeavor.
Revised:  (b) being legitimated by the parents' marriage or not is a thing the child can not change by its will or endeavor.
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Original:  (d) after this provision was added in 1984, both notions and actual states of people in Japan have been becoming of variety, as to family life or parent-child relationship.
Revised:  (d) after this provision was added in 1984, both notions and actual situations of people in Japan have been becoming of variety, as to family life or parent-child relationship.
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Original:  (f)  two conventions (# 1) which Japan has ratified provide that a child is not to face any discrimination by its birth;
Revised:  (f) two conventions (# 1) which Japan has ratified include provision meaning that a child is not to face any discrimination by its birth;
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