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Original:  It calls for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement  - to determine the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur , establishes a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes ,creates a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
Revised:  It calls for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement - to determine the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur . - Establishing a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes ,creates a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
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Original:  It calls for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement  - to determine the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur , establishes a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes ,creates a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
Revised:  It calls for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement - to determine the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur , establishes a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes . - Creating a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
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Original:  The Sudanese government and Sudanese Liberation Movement (SLM), led by Minni Minnawi, signed a peace deal to end three years of conflict.
Revised: Agreement Signed The Sudanese government and Sudanese Liberation Movement (SLM), led by Minni Minnawi, signed a peace deal to end three years of conflict.
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Original:  The deal, which follows intense talks in Abuja, capital of Nigeria, calls for the disbandment of rebel forces and the disarmament of the pro-government Janjaweed militia.
Revised:  The deal, which followed intense talks in Abuja, capital of Nigeria, calls for the disbandment of rebel forces and the disarmament of the pro-government Janjaweed militia.
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Original:  The conflict has killed about 200,000 and left about two million homeless.
Revised:  The conflict had killed about 200,000 and left about two million homeless.
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Original:  Two smaller groups say they are not happy with the terms of the deal.
Revised:  Two smaller groups said they were not happy with the terms of the deal.
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Original:  The initial deadline for the peace talks was Sunday at midnight, but the African Union extended it three times .
Revised:  The initial deadline for the peace talks was Sunday at midnight, but was extended thrice .
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Original:  The peace plan was prepared by mediators from the African Union and  amended after the rebel groups did not agree at an early draft.
Revised:  The peace plan was prepared by mediators from the African Union and was amended after the rebel groups did not agree at an early draft.
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Original:  International negotiators, including U.S. Deputy Secretary of State Robert Zoellick, Nigerian President Olusegun Obasanjo and British International Development Secretary Hilary Benn, say the deal is the best hope for peace in Darfur.
Revised:  International negotiators, including U.S. Deputy Secretary of State Robert Zoellick, Nigerian President Olusegun Obasanjo and British International Development Secretary Hilary Benn, said the deal was the best hope for peace in Darfur.
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Original:   The new plan decided on Observers say  failure to reach an agreement would have been disastrous for the people of Darfur, who have suffered through three years of conflict that has claimed 200,000 lives and driven more than 2 millions from their homes.
Revised:  New Plan The new plan decided on Observers say failure to reach an agreement would have been disastrous for the people of Darfur, who have suffered through three years of conflict that has claimed 200,000 lives and driven more than 2 millions from their homes.
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Original:  The rebels say the government is oppressing black Africans in favour of Arabs.
Revised:  The rebels said the government was oppressing black Africans in favour of Arabs.
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Original:  On the other side, Arab Janjaweed militias, drawn from Arab tribes, have been conducting a campaign of destruction with alleged help from the government.
Revised:  On the other side, Arab Janjaweed militias, drawn from Arab tribes, had been conducting a campaign of destruction with alleged help from the government.
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Original:  To flush out the rebels they have allegedly been targeting innocent civilians.
Revised:  To flush out the rebels they had allegedly been targeting innocent civilians.
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Original:  More than 90 villages were burnt and destroyed, Millions have fled their destroyed villages, with many heading for camps near Darfur's main towns.
Revised:  More than 90 villages were burnt and destroyed, millions have fled their destroyed villages, with many heading for camps near Darfur's main towns.
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Original:  But there is not enough food, water or medicine.
Revised:  But there was not enough food, water or medicine.
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Original:  The Janjaweed patrol outside the camps and Darfurians say the men are killed and the women  raped if they venture too far in search of firewood or water.
Revised:  The Janjaweed patrol outside the camps and Darfurians said the men were killed and the women raped if they venture too far in search of firewood or water.
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Original:  Many women report being abducted by the Janjaweed and held as sex slaves for more than a week before being released.
Revised:  Many women were reported being abducted by the Janjaweed and held as sex slaves for more than a week before being released.
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Original:  Some 200,000 have also sought safety in neighbouring Chad, but many of these are camped along a 600km stretch of the border and remain vulnerable to attacks from Sudan.
Revised:  Some 200,000 had also sought safety in neighbouring Chad, but many of these are camped along a 600km stretch of the border and remain vulnerable to attacks from Sudan.
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Original:  Some 200,000 have also sought safety in neighbouring Chad, but many of these are camped along a 600km stretch of the border and remain vulnerable to attacks from Sudan.
Revised:  Some 200,000 have also sought safety in neighbouring Chad, but many of them were camped along a 600km stretch of the border and remain vulnerable to attacks from Sudan.
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Original:  Chad is worried that the conflict could spill over the border.
Revised:  Chad was worried that the conflict could spill over the border.
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Original:  Sudan's government denies being in control of the Janjaweed and President Omar al-Bashir has called them "thieves and gangsters".
Revised:  Sudan's government denied being in control of the Janjaweed and President Omar al-Bashir has called them "thieves and gangsters".
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Original:  Sudan's government denies being in control of the Janjaweed and President Omar al-Bashir has called them "thieves and gangsters".
Revised:  Sudan's government denies being in control of the Janjaweed and President Omar al-Bashir called them "thieves and gangsters".
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Original:  But so far there is little evidence this has happened .
Revised:  But so far there was little evidence that this had been implemented .
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Original:  Thousands of extra policemen have been deployed but the refugees have little faith in the Sudanese security forces.
Revised:  Thousands of extra policemen were deployed but the refugees have little faith in the Sudanese security forces.
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Original:  Thousands of extra policemen have been deployed but the refugees have little faith in the Sudanese security forces.
Revised:  Thousands of extra policemen have been deployed but the refugees had little faith in the Sudanese security forces.
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Original:  Some 7,000 African Union troops have slowly been deployed in Darfur on a very limited mandate.
Revised:  Some 7,000 African Union troops had slowly been deployed in Darfur on a very limited mandate.
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Original:  Experts say the soldiers are too few to cover the whole area, and the African Union says it does not have the money to fund the operation for much longer.
Revised:  Experts said the soldiers were too few to cover the whole area, and the African Union says it does not have the money to fund the operation for much longer.
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Original:  Experts say the soldiers are too few to cover the whole area, and the African Union says it does not have the money to fund the operation for much longer.
Revised:  Experts say the soldiers are too few to cover the whole area, and the African Union said it did not have the money to fund the operation for much longer.
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Original:  Sudan is unhappy with suggestions that the UN take control of the peacekeeping mission.
Revised:  Sudan was unhappy with suggestions that the UN take control of the peacekeeping mission.
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Original:  Many aid agencies are working in Darfur but they are unable to get access to vast areas because of the fighting.
Revised:  Many aid agencies , working in Darfur but they are unable to get access to vast areas because of the fighting.
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Original:  Many aid agencies are working in Darfur but they are unable to get access to vast areas because of the fighting.
Revised:  Many aid agencies are working in Darfur were unable to get access to vast areas because of the fighting.
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Original:  They say a peace agreement is vital before the rainy season begins in June when planting of food crops must be completed.
Revised:  They said a peace agreement is vital before the rainy season begins in June when planting of food crops must be completed.
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Original: - Disarming comletely Janjaweed militia by mid-October. -
Revised:  Disarming comletely Janjaweed militia by mid-October. -
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Original: - Disarming comletely Janjaweed militia by mid-October. -
Revised: - Disarming comletely Janjaweed militia by mid-October. 
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Original:  Placing restrictions on the movements of the paramilitary Forces and requires them to be reduced in size. -
Revised:  Placing restrictions on the movements of the paramilitary Forces and requires them to be reduced in size. 
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Original:  Establishing buffer zones around IDP [internally displaced persons] camps and humanitarian assistance corridors, into which rebel forces and Sudanese Armed Forces cannot go. -
Revised:  Establishing buffer zones around IDP [internally displaced persons] camps and humanitarian assistance corridors, into which rebel forces and Sudanese Armed Forces cannot go. 
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Original:  Defining the principles for integration of the rebel forces into the Sudanese armed forces and police. -
Revised:  Defining the principles for integration of the rebel forces into the Sudanese armed forces and police. 
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Original:  Integrating 4,000 former combatants into the army. - Integrating 1,000 into the police. - Supporting 3,000 through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur. - Providing strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces. - Giving the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
Revised:  Integrating 4,000 former combatants into the army. Integrating 1,000 into the police. - Supporting 3,000 through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur. - Providing strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces. - Giving the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
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Original:  Integrating 4,000 former combatants into the army. - Integrating 1,000 into the police. - Supporting 3,000 through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur. - Providing strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces. - Giving the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
Revised:  Integrating 4,000 former combatants into the army. - Integrating 1,000 into the police. < Supporting 3,000 through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur. - Providing strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces. - Giving the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
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Original:  Integrating 4,000 former combatants into the army. - Integrating 1,000 into the police. - Supporting 3,000 through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur. - Providing strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces. - Giving the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
Revised:  Integrating 4,000 former combatants into the army. - Integrating 1,000 into the police. - Supporting 3,000 through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur. Providing strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces. - Giving the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
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Original:  Integrating 4,000 former combatants into the army. - Integrating 1,000 into the police. - Supporting 3,000 through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur. - Providing strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces. - Giving the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
Revised:  Integrating 4,000 former combatants into the army. - Integrating 1,000 into the police. - Supporting 3,000 through education and training programmes to assist in the civilian reconstruction and development of Darfur. - Providing strong rebel forces representation in the leadership positions of the Sudanese armed forces. Giving the rebel movements the fourth-highest position in the Sudanese government of national unity;
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Original:  senior assistant to the president and chairperson of the transitional Darfur regional authority. -
Revised:  senior assistant to the president and chairperson of the transitional Darfur regional authority. 
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Original:  Establishing democratic processes for the people of Darfur to choose their leaders and determine their status as a region. -
Revised:  Establishing democratic processes for the people of Darfur to choose their leaders and determine their status as a region. 
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Original:  Arranging a popular referendum by July 2010 to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. - Holding Elections at every level of government not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Granting the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
Revised:  Arranging a popular referendum by July 2010 to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. Holding Elections at every level of government not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Granting the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
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Original:  Arranging a popular referendum by July 2010 to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. - Holding Elections at every level of government not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. - Granting the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
Revised:  Arranging a popular referendum by July 2010 to decide whether to establish Darfur as a unitary region with a single government. - Holding Elections at every level of government not later than July 2009, in accordance with the interim national constitution. Granting the rebel movements chairmanship and control (at least eight of 10 seats) in the transitional Darfur regional authority.
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Original:  This body is responsible for implementation of the peace agreement in Darfur. -
Revised:  This body is responsible for implementation of the peace agreement in Darfur. 
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Original:  Allocating to the rebel movements 12 seats in the national assembly in Khartoum. -
Revised:  Allocating to the rebel movements 12 seats in the national assembly in Khartoum. 
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Original:  Allocating to the rebel movements 21 seats in each of the Darfur state legislatures. -
Revised:  Allocating to the rebel movements 21 seats in each of the Darfur state legislatures. 
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Original:  Awarding to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. -
Revised:  Awarding to the rebel movements one state governor of Darfur, and two deputy state governors. 
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Original:  Allocating to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. -
Revised:  Allocating to the rebel movements senior positions in state ministries. 
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Original:  Guaranteeing to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. -
Revised:  Guaranteeing to the rebel movements key posts in local governments. 
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Original:  Creating a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. -
Revised:  Creating a fund for Darfur reconstruction and development. 
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Original:  Contributing $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years to Darfur fund. -
Revised:  Contributing $300 million initially and then $200 million a year for two additional years to Darfur fund. 
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Original:  Calling for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement. - Determining the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur. - Establishing a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes. - Creating a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
Revised:  Calling for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement. Determining the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur. - Establishing a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes. - Creating a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
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Original:  Calling for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement. - Determining the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur. - Establishing a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes. - Creating a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
Revised:  Calling for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement. - Determining the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur. Establishing a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes. - Creating a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
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Original:  Calling for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement. - Determining the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur. - Establishing a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes. - Creating a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
Revised:  Calling for a joint assessment mission - modelled on the one done for southern reconstruction after the Comprehensive (North-South) Peace Agreement. - Determining the specific reconstruction and development needs of Darfur. - Establishing a commission to work with the UN to help refugees and displaced persons return to their homes. Creating a commission to provide compensation to victims of the conflict.
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Original:  Two smaller groups said they were not happy with the terms of the deal.
Revised: Opposition Two smaller groups said they were not happy with the terms of the deal.
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Original:   Rebel negotiators faced intense pressure to accept the amended deal, as diplomats from the United States, Britain, Canada and the European Union struggled to find common ground.
Revised:  Mediators Rebel negotiators faced intense pressure to accept the amended deal, as diplomats from the United States, Britain, Canada and the European Union struggled to find common ground.
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Original: Aid Agency's Concern Many aid agencies,working in Darfur were unable to get access to vast areas because of the fighting.
Revised:  Many aid agencies,working in Darfur were unable to get access to vast areas because of the fighting.
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Original:  Sheehan, the mother of a fallen American soldier who served in Iraq, called on the Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper to "open the border" to U.S. military deserters.
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Original: China is expanding military and economic connections in Latin America, including countires which are barred by a U.S. law from receiving military training and aid from the US itself.
Revised: China is expanding military and economic connections in Latin America, including countries, which are barred by a U.S. law from receiving military training and aid from the US itself.
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Original: China is expanding military and economic connections in Latin America, including countires which are barred by a U.S. law from receiving military training and aid from the US itself.
Revised: China is expanding military and economic connections in Latin America, including countires which are barred by a U.S. law from receiving military training and aid from the U.S. itself.
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Original:  According to Jose Ruiz, a spokesman for Southern Command, China has had exchanges of senior defense officials with Ecuador, Bolivia and Chile and  provided military aid and training to Jamaica and Venezuela  
Revised:  According to Jose Ruiz, a spokesman for Southern Command, China has participated in exchanges of senior defense officials with Ecuador, Bolivia and Chile and provided military aid and training to Jamaica and Venezuela 
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