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Original:  Retrieved on 2006-12-31 . Domestic policy%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:A5235-5.jpg|250px|President Ford meets with his Cabinet in 1975%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The economy was a great concern during the Ford administration.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Foreign policy%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:vietnamescape.jpg|thumbnail|225px|South Vietnamese civilians scramble to board a U.S. helicopter during the American evacuation of Saigon%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Ford Administration saw the final withdrawal of American personnel from Vietnam in 'Operation Frequent Wind', and the subsequent fall of Saigon.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:vietnamescape.jpg|thumbnail|225px|South Vietnamese civilians scramble to board a U.S. helicopter during the American evacuation of Saigon%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Ford Administration saw the final withdrawal of American personnel from Vietnam in 'Operation Frequent Wind', and the subsequent fall of Saigon.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Foreign policy%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:vietnamescape.jpg|thumbnail|225px|South Vietnamese civilians scramble to board a U.S. helicopter during the American evacuation of Saigon%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Ford Administration saw the final withdrawal of American personnel from Vietnam in 'Operation Frequent Wind', and the subsequent fall of Saigon.
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Original:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% From the prior administration, in addition to longstanding Cold War issues, Ford inherited the on-going détente with both the Soviet Union and the People's Republic of China—and the policy of building relationships with the two communist countries, which had been mutually antagonistic toward each other for many years.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Assassination attempts%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:Frommeassassinationattempt.jpg|225px|Secret Service rushing Ford to safety after an assassination attempt by Lynette "Squeaky" Fromme%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford faced two assassination attempts during his presidency, occurring within three weeks of each other.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Assassination attempts%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:Frommeassassinationattempt.jpg|225px|Secret Service rushing Ford to safety after an assassination attempt by Lynette "Squeaky" Fromme%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford faced two assassination attempts during his presidency, occurring within three weeks of each other.
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Original:  "He only lived, what, 100 miles%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 160 km%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% from the border and he visited southern Ontario very often,' he said.
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Original:  "He has served his nation well," Ford said of Stevens, "with dignity, intellect and without partisan political concerns."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1976 presidential election%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:Repub8a.jpg|225px|Ford and his wife, Betty, after his nomination at the 1976 Republican Convention%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford reluctantly agreed to run for office in 1976 but first had to counter a challenge for the Republican party nomination.
Revised:  "He has served his nation well," Ford said of Stevens, "with dignity, intellect and without partisan political concerns."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:Repub8a.jpg|225px|Ford and his wife, Betty, after his nomination at the 1976 Republican Convention%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford reluctantly agreed to run for office in 1976 but first had to counter a challenge for the Republican party nomination.
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Original:  "He has served his nation well," Ford said of Stevens, "with dignity, intellect and without partisan political concerns."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1976 presidential election%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:Repub8a.jpg|225px|Ford and his wife, Betty, after his nomination at the 1976 Republican Convention%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford reluctantly agreed to run for office in 1976 but first had to counter a challenge for the Republican party nomination.
Revised:  "He has served his nation well," Ford said of Stevens, "with dignity, intellect and without partisan political concerns."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1976 presidential election%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% %DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford reluctantly agreed to run for office in 1976 but first had to counter a challenge for the Republican party nomination.
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Original: New York Times, April 20, 1975%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:Carterford.jpg|250px|Ford (at right) and Jimmy Carter debate%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Democratic nominee and former Georgia governor Jimmy Carter campaigned as an outsider and reformer;
Revised: New York Times, April 20, 1975%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% %DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Democratic nominee and former Georgia governor Jimmy Carter campaigned as an outsider and reformer;
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Had Ford won the election, he would have been disqualified by the 22nd Amendment from running in 1980, since he served more than 2 years of Nixon's term.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Like Presidents Carter, Bush Senior and Clinton, Ford was an honorary co-chair of the Council for Excellence in Government, a group dedicated to excellence in government performance and which provides leadership training to top federal employees.
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Original:  Wa%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:Presford90.jpg|225px|Ford at his 90th birthday party at the White House in 2003%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% On 29 October, 2001, in an article by Deb Price, a columnist with the Detroit News, Ford broke with conservative members of the Republican party by stating that gay and lesbian couples "ought to be treated equally.
Revised:  Wa%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% %DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% On 29 October, 2001, in an article by Deb Price, a columnist with the Detroit News, Ford broke with conservative members of the Republican party by stating that gay and lesbian couples "ought to be treated equally.
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Original: "Stolberg, Sheryl Gay, "Vocal Gay Republicans Upsetting Conservatives," The New York Times, 1 June 2003, page N26%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On November 22, 2004, New York Republican Governor George Pataki named Ford and the other living former Presidents (Carter, George H. W. Bush and Bill Clinton) as honorary members of the board rebuilding the World Trade Center.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Longevity%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:20060423-2_g8o6137-515h.jpg|225px|President George W. Bush with former President Ford and his wife Betty on April 23, 2006;
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:20060423-2_g8o6137-515h.jpg|225px|President George W. Bush with former President Ford and his wife Betty on April 23, 2006;
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Original: See URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford had the second longest post-presidency (29 years and 11 months) after Herbert Hoover (31 years and 7 months).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gerald and Betty Ford hold the record as the longest-lived first couple (combining their ages) at ages 93 and 88, respectively.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Death%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford died at the age of 93 years and 165 days on December 26, 2006 at 6:45 p.m Pacific Standard Time (02:45, December 27, UTC) at his home in Rancho Mirage, California.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford died at the age of 93 years and 165 days on December 26, 2006 at 6:45 p.m Pacific Standard Time (02:45, December 27, UTC) at his home in Rancho Mirage, California.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:Fords_grave.jpg|225px|President Ford's Tomb at his Presidential Museum in Grand Rapids, Michigan%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% At 8:49 p.m., Ford's wife, Betty, issued a statement that confirmed his death: "My family joins me in sharing the difficult news that Gerald Ford, our beloved husband, father, grandfather and great grandfather, has passed away at 93 years of age.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% %DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% At 8:49 p.m., Ford's wife, Betty, issued a statement that confirmed his death: "My family joins me in sharing the difficult news that Gerald Ford, our beloved husband, father, grandfather and great grandfather, has passed away at 93 years of age.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Betty Ford Gerald R. Ford Freeway Gerald R. Ford International Airport in Grand Rapids, Michigan Gerald R. Ford Library in Ann Arbor, Michigan Gerald R. Ford Museum in Grand Rapids, Michigan Gerald R. Ford School of Public Policy, University of Michigan USS Gerald R. Ford (CVN-78)
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Betty Ford Gerald R. Ford Freeway Gerald R. Ford International Airport in Grand Rapids, Michigan Gerald R. Ford Library in Ann Arbor, Michigan Gerald R. Ford Museum in Grand Rapids, Michigan Gerald R. Ford School of Public Policy, University of Michigan USS Gerald R. Ford (CVN-78)
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Original:  List of notable World War II veterans Liberty, Ford's pet (a golden retriever)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:
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Original:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bibliography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Further reading Personal memoirs and official biographies%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Administration officials'
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Biographies White House biography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hauenstein Center for Presidential Studies Brief biography of Gerald Ford Collection of photographs of President Ford's homes throughout his life Spartacus Educational Biography President Ford%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Obituaries @ Seattle Times @ The Guardian @ Workers World%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Multimedia and other Audio recordings of Ford's speeches.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Biographies White House biography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hauenstein Center for Presidential Studies Brief biography of Gerald Ford Collection of photographs of President Ford's homes throughout his life Spartacus Educational Biography President Ford%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Obituaries @ Seattle Times @ The Guardian @ Workers World%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Multimedia and other Audio recordings of Ford's speeches.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald Ford, Gerald%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ar:
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Original: The Creole Renaissance is a movement which established Creole as legitimate literary language, started in large part by authors like Felix Morisseau-Leroy, who struggled successfully to make Haitian Creole the literary, educational, and official language of  Haiti.
Revised: The Creole Renaissance is a movement which established Creole as legitimate literary language, started in large part by authors like Felix Morisseau-Leroy, who struggled successfully to make Haitian Creole the literary, educational, and official language of the Caribbean country Haiti.
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Original: The Creole Renaissance is a movement which established Creole as legitimate literary language, started in large part by authors like Felix Morisseau-Leroy, who struggled successfully to make Haitian Creole the literary, educational, and official language of the Caribbean country Haiti.
Revised: The Creole Renaissance is a movement which established Creole as legitimate literary language, started in large part by authors like Felix Morisseau-Leroy, who struggled successfully to make Haitian Creole the literary, educational, and official language of Haiti.
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Original:  Without continued neuroangiogenesis, areas of the brain may no longer have the full complement of functional capillaries and hence, by inference, cognitive ability declines . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Medical terminology Category:Human physiology Category:Human biology Category:Pathology Category:Embryolo
Revised:  Without continued neuroangiogenesis, areas of the brain may no longer have the full complement of functional capillaries and hence, by inference, cognitive ability declines References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Medical terminology Category:Human physiology Category:Human biology Category:Pathology Category:Embryolo
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Original:  Without continued neuroangiogenesis, areas of the brain may no longer have the full complement of functional capillaries and hence, by inference, cognitive ability declines . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Medical terminology Category:Human physiology Category:Human biology Category:Pathology Category:Embryolo
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Original:  Without continued neuroangiogenesis, areas of the brain may no longer have the full complement of functional capillaries and hence, by inference, cognitive ability declines . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Medical terminology Category:Human physiology Category:Human biology Category:Pathology Category:Embryolo
Revised:  Without continued neuroangiogenesis, areas of the brain may no longer have the full complement of functional capillaries and hence, by inference, cognitive ability declines . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: A condition possibly related to a reduction in neuroangiogenic factors is Alzheimer’s disease.
Revised: A condition possibly resulting from a reduction in neuroangiogenic factors is Alzheimer’s disease.
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Original:  It has been propose that neuroangiogenesis could be a factor in a vascular basis for Alzheimer's disease in humans
Revised:  It has been propose that neuroangiogenesis could be a vascular basis for Alzheimer's disease in humans
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Original:  It has been propose that neuroangiogenesis could be a factor in a vascular basis for Alzheimer's disease in humans
Revised:  It has been propose that neuroangiogenesis could be a factor in a vascular basis for Alzheimer's disease 
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Original:  Pathology Neuroangiogenesis is implicated in a number of pathologies, including endometriosis  and senile dementias  such as Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  Pathology Neuroangiogenesis is implicated in a number of pathologies, including endometriosis and senile dementias , such as Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  Each of these incurs a significant cost for the healthcare industry, meaning that complete understanding of processes involved - including neuroangiogenesis - is necessary to enable development of functional treatments.
Revised:  Each of these incurs a significant cost for the healthcare industry, meaning that complete understanding of processes involved – including neuroangiogenesis – is necessary to enable development of functional treatments.
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Original:  Endometriosis is a common gynaecological disease caused by endometrial tissue implanting outside the uterus, a common symptom of which is chronic pelvic pain.
Revised:  Endometriosis is a common gynaecological disease caused by endometrial tissue implanting outside the uterus, a symptom of which is chronic pelvic pain.
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Original:  The formation, growth and persistence of these implants are dependent upon angiogenesis to increase the supply of blood vessels in these areas .
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Original:  Without continued neuroangiogenesis during aging, areas of the brain may no longer have the full complement of functional capillaries and hence, by inference, cognitive ability declines .
Revised:  Without continued neuroangiogenesis during aging, areas of the brain may no longer have the full complement of functional capillaries and hence, by inference, cerebral blood flow and cognitive ability decline .
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Original: Neuroangiogenesis is a term used to describe the coordinated growth of nerves and blood vessels.
Revised: Neuroangiogenesis is the coordinated growth of nerves and blood vessels.
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Original:  He belongs to the Maharashtra state of India but migrated to Nagaland for social work at the age of 23.
Revised:  He came from the Maharashtra state of India but migrated to Nagaland for social work at the age of 23.
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Original:  Thakkar donated 100,000 Indian rupees of Award money to set up a senior citizen' s retreat in the village.
Revised:  Thakkar donated 100,000 Indian rupees of Award money to set up a senior citizens' retreat in the village.
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Original:  To faciliate this, he created the Regiment of Presidential Security (RSP), an elite force accused of numerous extrajudicial killings and acts of torture.
Revised:  To facilitate this, he created the Regiment of Presidential Security (RSP), an elite force accused of numerous extrajudicial killings and acts of torture.
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Original:  in October 1996 several soldiers of the Regiment, among them the commander Hyacinthe Kafando, were put on trial for plotting to launch a coup, possibly with Ivorian involvement. cite book |author= |title=Africa South of the Sahara 2003 |location=London |publisher=Psychology Press |page=105 |date=2002 |isbn=185-743-131-6 | Other than the threat of military coups, Compaoré also faced opposition from civic society, such as a large 1999 general strike.
Revised:  in October 1996 several soldiers of the Regiment, among them the commander Hyacinthe Kafando, were put on trial for plotting to launch a coup, possibly with Ivorian involvement. Other than the threat of military coups, Compaoré also faced opposition from civic society, such as a large 1999 general strike.
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Original:  The highest ranking officer to be arrested was Commander Bernadin Poda, accused of siphoning army funds to finance the coup.
Revised:  The highest-ranking officer to be arrested was Commander Bernadin Poda, accused of siphoning army funds to finance the coup.
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