wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Other sites, such as Hootsuite and , displayed error messages instead of their normal home pages  
Revised:  Other sites, such as Hootsuite and , displayed error messages instead of their normal home pages . 
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Original: Amazon has experienced outages before, including one in 2008 that lasted two-hour due to technical problems at a data center.
Revised: Amazon has experienced outages before, including one in 2008 that lasted two hours due to technical problems at a data center.
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Original:  In 2008 his client received 600,000 and an apology, as well as a separate undisclosed amount from broadcaster  
Revised:  In 2008 his client received 600,000 and an apology, as well as a separate undisclosed amount from broadcaster . 
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Original:  Tabak's next court appearance is to be on May 4 and October is set to see his trial .
Revised:  Tabak's next court appearance is set for May 4 and October is set to see his trial .
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Original:  Tabak's next court appearance is to be on May 4 and October is set to see his trial .
Revised:  Tabak's next court appearance is to be on May 4 and the trial is sheduled to take place in October .
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Original: Lawyer Louis Charalambous says Jeffries "seek[s] vindication of his reputation for the terrible treatment he received" from six newspapers - ,, , , , and .
Revised: Lawyer Louis Charalambous says Jeffries "seek[s] vindication of his reputation for the terrible treatment he received" from six newspapers – ,, , , , and .
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Original:  Another man who shared the Clifton address - Vincent Tabak - was later arrested when police eliminated Jeffries from any involvement with the murder.
Revised:  Another man who shared the Clifton address – Vincent Tabak – was later arrested when police eliminated Jeffries from any involvement with the murder.
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Original:  Although no prosecuations have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targetted by Jeffries - The Sun and The Daily Mail - in their coverage of a different murder.
Revised:  Although no prosecuations have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targetted by Jeffries - The Sun and The Daily Mail - in their coverage of a different murder.
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Original:  Although no prosecuations have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targetted by Jeffries - The Sun and The Daily Mail - in their coverage of a different murder.
Revised:  Although no prosecuations have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targetted by Jeffries – The Sun and The Daily Mail - in their coverage of a different murder.
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Original:  Although no prosecuations have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targetted by Jeffries - The Sun and The Daily Mail - in their coverage of a different murder.
Revised:  Although no prosecuations have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targetted by Jeffries - The Sun and The Daily Mail – over their coverage of a different murder.
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Original:  The papers all covered the man's arrest following the discovery of a body near  Bristol, England 's Clifton area on Christmas day ;
Revised:  The papers all covered the man's arrest following the discovery of a body near the Clifton area of Bristol, England 's Clifton area on Christmas day ;
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Original:  The papers all covered the man's arrest following the discovery of a body near  Bristol, England 's Clifton area on Christmas day ;
Revised:  The papers all covered the man's arrest following the discovery of a body near Bristol, England , on Christmas Day ;
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Original:  Jeffries is the flat's landlord.
Revised:  Jeffries was the flat's landlord.
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Original:  Tabak's next court appearance is set for May 4 and the trial is sheduled to take place in October.
Revised:  Tabak's next court appearance is set for May 4 and the trial is scheduled to take place in October.
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Original:  Although no prosecuations have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targetted by Jeffries – The Sun and The Daily Mail – over their coverage of a different murder.
Revised:  Although no prosecutions have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targetted by Jeffries – The Sun and The Daily Mail – over their coverage of a different murder.
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Original:  Although no prosecuations have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targetted by Jeffries – The Sun and The Daily Mail – over their coverage of a different murder.
Revised:  Although no prosecuations have been launched to date, Grieve recently succeeded in an action claiming contempt of court by two of the papers targeted by Jeffries – The Sun and The Daily Mail – over their coverage of a different murder.
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Original:  In 2008 his client received 600,000 and an apology, as well as a separate undisclosed amount from broadcaster .
Revised:  In 2008 Murat received 600,000 and an apology, as well as a separate undisclosed amount from broadcaster .
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Original:  ]] Apple Inc.
Revised:  ]] Apple
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Original:  's and periodically send  location information back to the company , according to new reports .
Revised:  's and periodically send location information back to the company .
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Original: People became aware of this data tracking after when customers upgraded to the operating system for iPhones iPads.
Revised: The tracking feature was revealed with the operating system for iPhones iPads.
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Original:  However, the company declined to comment on the latest findings regarding its data collection .
Revised:  However, the company declined to comment on the latest findings regarding its data collection 
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Original:  The tracking feature was revealed with the operating system for iPhones.
Revised: No personally identifiable information is transmitted off of your device, and Apple has stated that they are not collecting any identifiable user information. However, privacy advocates are concerned that the file could present a serious risk if it fell into the wrong hands. The file can be used by investigators to identify where your phone, and likely you, have been if they are able to get to the file. The tracking feature was revealed with the operating system for iPhones.
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Original:  ]] Apple 's and are attracting a lot of scrutiny in light of the recent discovery that the devices may be secretly saving personal data about where you have been.
Revised:  ]] Apple Inc. 's and are attracting a lot of scrutiny in light of the recent discovery that the devices may be secretly saving personal data about where you have been.
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Original:  According to new reports, the and periodically send the location information back to the company  .
Revised:  periodically send location information back to the company .
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Original:  Controller Chiang's office  informed former California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger there were outstanding debts, but his administration did nothing .
Revised:  Chiang's office informed former California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger there were outstanding debts, but his administration did nothing .
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Original:  Controller Chiang's office  informed former California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger there were outstanding debts, but his administration did nothing .
Revised:  Controller Chiang's office had informed former California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger there were outstanding debts, but his administration did nothing .
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Original:  Controller Chiang's office  informed former California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger there were outstanding debts, but his administration did nothing .
Revised:  Controller Chiang's office informed former California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger there were outstanding debts, but Schwarzenegger's administration did not take action .
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Original:  Chiang's office had informed former California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger there were outstanding debts, but Schwarzenegger's administration did not take action.
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Original:  The California Controller's office reports that eleven state agencies have given US $13.3 million in pay and travel advances that have not been collected.
Revised:  The California office reports that eleven state agencies have given US $13.3 million in pay and travel advances that have not been collected.
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Original: The , also called Caltrans, has the largest debt of the eleven agencies: $3.2 million. w|California Department of Forestry and Fire Protection|Cal Fire , or the California Department of Forestry and Fire Protection, "had an outstanding balance of $1.44 million as of June 30, 2008.
Revised: The , also called Caltrans, has the largest debt of the eleven agencies: $3.2 million. , or the California Department of Forestry and Fire Protection, "had an outstanding balance of $1.44 million as of June 30, 2008.
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Original: Morgan quotes data from a 2008 report by the and cited by the World Coal Association, now known as the after it changed its name in November 2010 , that showed coal-plants produce over 40 percent of the global electricity.
Revised: Morgan quotes data from a 2008 report by the and cited by the World Coal Association, now known as the , that showed coal-plants produce over 40 percent of the global electricity.
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Original: Morgan quotes data from a 2008 report by the and cited by the World Coal Association, now known as the after it changed its name in November 2010 , that showed coal-plants produce over 40 percent of the global electricity.
Revised: Morgan quotes data from a 2008 report by the and cited by the World Coal Association, now known as the after it changed its name in November 2010 , that showed coal plants produce over 40 percent of the global electricity.
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Original:  Other countries use more coal . South Africareceives 93 percent of its energy from coal, Poland obtains 92 percent from coal and Chinagenerates 79 percent of its energy from coal . "The world is still dependent on non-renewable energy sources – coal and nuclear with a smattering of oil and gas – to generate electricity," he says, suggesting the IT companies should not be singled out.
Revised:  Some other countries use more coal . South Africareceives 93 percent of its energy from coal, Poland obtains 92 percent from coal and Chinagenerates 79 percent of its energy from coal . "The world is still dependent on non-renewable energy sources – coal and nuclear with a smattering of oil and gas – to generate electricity," he says, suggesting the IT companies should not be singled out.
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Original:  Other countries use more coal . South Africareceives 93 percent of its energy from coal, Poland obtains 92 percent from coal and Chinagenerates 79 percent of its energy from coal . "The world is still dependent on non-renewable energy sources – coal and nuclear with a smattering of oil and gas – to generate electricity," he says, suggesting the IT companies should not be singled out.
Revised:  Other countries use more coal such as South Africa, Poland and China . "The world is still dependent on non-renewable energy sources – coal and nuclear with a smattering of oil and gas – to generate electricity," he says, suggesting the IT companies should not be singled out.
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Original:  Morgan is also critical of Greenpeace's methodology in gathering the data, as it included only a sample of the data center of these companies, and some (as in the case of Apple) that were not yet completely operational.
Revised:  Morgan is also critical of Greenpeace's methodology in gathering the data, as it included only a sample of the data centers of these companies, and some (as in the case of Apple) that were not yet completely operational.
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Original:  Morgan is also critical of Greenpeace's methodology in gathering the data, as it included only a sample of the data center of these companies, and some (as in the case of Apple) that were not yet completely operational.
Revised:  Morgan is also critical of Greenpeace's methodology in gathering the data, as it included only a sample of the data center of these companies, and some that were not yet completely operational.
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Original:  He noted that because the companies cited were not always cooperative in disclosing information, Greenpeace estimated  the data.
Revised:  He noted that because the companies were not always cooperative in disclosing information, Greenpeace estimated the data.
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Original:  He said that the reader has to "drill down into the report" to see the the complete picture . "It seems a little disingenuous to give Amazon a D for siting its data centers when its two modern centers are largely powered by renewable energy, he said .
Revised:  He said that the reader has to "drill down into the report" to see the the complete picture .
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Original:  Companies are locating their date centers in areas that afford cheap, abundant coal-powered electricity.
Revised:  Companies are locating their data centers in areas that afford cheap, abundant coal-powered electricity.
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Original:     I don't think they have found ways to change the corporate culture sufficiently to prevent future accidents .
Revised:  "Even if everybody tries very hard, there is going to be an accident caused by cost-cutting and pressure on workers. These are moneymaking machines and they make money by pushing things to the limit." I don't think they have found ways to change the corporate culture sufficiently to prevent future accidents .
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Original:     I don't think they have found ways to change the corporate culture sufficiently to prevent future accidents .
Revised:  I don't see any daylight at the end of this tunnel, one fisherwoman said. "I don't see any hope at all. We thought we'd see hope after a year, but there's nothing .
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Original:  The families of the victims of the explosion flew over the site where the rig stood this week as they expressed anger at —who owned Deepwater Horizon—who they say is being unfair and slow in paying out compensation from a $ 4bn fund.
Revised:  The families have expressed anger at —who owned Deepwater Horizon—who they say is being unfair and slow in paying out compensation from a $ 4bn fund.
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Original:  Deepwater Horizon had serious safety management system failures and a poor safety culture," the report says.
Revised:  The rig had " serious safety management system failures and a poor safety culture," the report says.
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Original: A slapdash culture on Deepwater Horizon would mean equipment was not mended or replaced if it meant losing valuable hours of drilling, the Coastguard found.
Revised: A slapdash culture on Deepwater Horizon would mean equipment was not mended or replaced if it meant losing valuable hours of drilling, the Coast Guard found.
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Original:  Transocean attacked the conclusions and suggested the Coastguard may have played a role in the disaster.
Revised:  Transocean attacked the conclusions and suggested the Coast Guard may have played a role in the disaster.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the company said Deepwater Horizon had been inspected by Coastguard officials only months before the explosion, and had said it complied with safety standards.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the company said Deepwater Horizon had been inspected by Coast Guard officials only months before the explosion, and had said it complied with safety standards.
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Original:  "We strongly disagree with—and documentary evidence in the Coastguard 's possession refutes—key findings in this report," the company said.
Revised:  "We strongly disagree with—and documentary evidence in the Coast Guard 's possession refutes—key findings in this report," the company said.
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Original:  The explosion on the rig killed 11 people and began the in the history of the petroleum industry.
Revised:  The explosion on the rig killed eleven people and began the in the history of the petroleum industry.
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Original:  An investigation by the has concluded the in the history of the petroleum industry which caused widespread environmental damage was caused partly because of a poor safety culture  aboard the oil rig in the .
Revised:  An investigation by the has concluded the in the history of the petroleum industry was partly the result of a " poor safety culture aboard the oil rig in the .
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Original:  An investigation by the has concluded the in the history of the petroleum industry which caused widespread environmental damage was caused partly because of a poor safety culture  aboard the oil rig in the .
Revised:  An investigation by the has concluded the in the history of the petroleum industry which caused widespread environmental damage was caused partly because of a poor safety culture " aboard the oil rig in the .
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Original:  The report squarely blames , which managed the Deepwater Horizon rig , for being largely responsible for the which claimed 11 lives.
Revised:  The report squarely blames , which managed the Deepwater Horizon , for being largely responsible for the which claimed 11 lives.
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Original:  The report squarely blames , which managed the Deepwater Horizon rig , for being largely responsible for the which claimed 11 lives.
Revised:  The report squarely blames , which managed the Deepwater Horizon rig , for being largely responsible for the that claimed eleven lives.
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Original:  A slapdash culture on Deepwater Horizon would mean equipment was not mended or replaced if it meant losing valuable hours of drilling, the Coast Guard found.
Revised:  A slapdash safety environment on Deepwater Horizon would mean equipment was not mended or replaced if it meant losing valuable hours of drilling, the Coast Guard found.
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Original:  Electrical equipment believed to have caused a spark which ignited in April of last year was described as being in "bad condition" and "seriously corroded ".
Revised:  Electrical equipment believed to have caused a spark that ignited was described as being in "bad condition" and "seriously corroded ".
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Original:  Electrical equipment believed to have caused a spark which ignited in April of last year was described as being in "bad condition" and "seriously corroded ".
Revised:  Electrical equipment believed to have caused a spark which ignited in April of last year was described as being in "bad condition" and "seriously corroded ."
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Original:  The report found  other deficiencies—  and emergency equipment set up improperly ;
Revised:  The report found that other deficiencies— and emergency equipment set up improperly ;
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Original:  The report found  other deficiencies—  and emergency equipment set up improperly ;
Revised:  The report found other deficiencies— and emergency equipment ;
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Original:  and poor training on dealing with a —all contributed to the disaster.
Revised:  and poor preparation for dealing with a —all contributed to the disaster.
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Original:  Transocean attacked the  conclusions and suggested the Coast Guard may have played a role in the disaster.
Revised:  Transocean attacked the report's conclusions and suggested the Coast Guard may have played a role in the disaster.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the company said Deepwater Horizon had been inspected by Coast Guard officials only months before the explosion, and had said it complied with safety standards.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the company said Deepwater Horizon had been inspected by Coast Guard officials only months before the explosion, officials who said it complied with safety standards.
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Original:  —the oil giant which owned Deepwater Horizon —this week launched legal action against Transocean , as well as , the company which cemented the well, and , who manufactured the , which failed to prevent oil  leaking from the well.
Revised:  This week, Deepwater Horizon owner launched legal action against Transocean , as well as , the company which cemented the well, and , who manufactured the , which failed to prevent oil leaking from the well.
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Original:  The area is still heavily affected by the disaster and the reconstruction of the industry which once thrived is slow.
Revised:  The area is still heavily affected by the disaster and reconstruction of the industry which once thrived is slow.
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Original:  While tourists are beginning to return to the area , many are angry at BP and the over how they handled the disaster.
Revised:  While tourists are beginning to return to the region , many are angry at BP and the over how they handled the disaster.
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Original:  All the fishing waters in the area have now opened again, but people who live in the area remain angry . "I don't see any daylight at the end of this tunnel,  one fisherwoman said.
Revised:  All the fishing waters in the area have now opened again, but people who live in the area remain dissatisfied . "I don't see any daylight at the end of this tunnel, one fisherwoman said.
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Original:  All the fishing waters in the area have now opened again, but people who live in the area remain angry . "I don't see any daylight at the end of this tunnel,  one fisherwoman said.
Revised:  All the fishing waters in the area have now opened again, but people who live in the area remain angry . "I don't see any daylight at the end of this tunnel, " one fisherwoman said.
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Original: US President Barack Obama marked the anniversary of the explosion by conceding that although "progress" has been made to ensure the safety of deep water drilling rigs, "the job isn't done."
Revised: U.S. President Barack Obama marked the anniversary of the explosion by conceding that although "progress" has been made to ensure the safety of deep water drilling rigs, "the job isn't done."
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Original:  Obama's comments came less than a week after leading experts raised serious questions over the security of as the US government approves more exploration without improving safety measures.
Revised:  Obama's comments came less than a week after leading experts raised serious questions over the security of as the U.S. government approves more exploration without improving safety measures.
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Original:  The first attacks carried out by United States in Libya reportedly occurred today, as the Pentagon confirmed a strike carried out by the but declined to give further details.
Revised:  The first attacks carried out by United States in Libya reportedly occurred today, as the confirmed a strike carried out by the but declined to give further details.
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Original:  According to the Pentagon, "common practice" regarding drone operations is to provide no more information than to confirm an attack.  ]
Revised:  According to the Pentagon, "common practice" regarding drone operations is to provide no more information than to confirm an attack. t]
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