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Original:  The city council, which is normally  leisurely in passing ordinances, voted 45-0 to approve the new regulations and was remarkably quick in passing the laws.
Revised:  The city council, which is normally considered leisurely in passing ordinances, voted 45-0 to approve the new regulations and was remarkably quick in passing the laws.
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Original:  The new restrictions ban gun shops in the city and prohibits people from stepping outside their homes with a handgun.
Revised:  The new restrictions ban gun shops in the city and prohibits people from leaving their residences while in possession of a handgun.
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Original:  It also requires that all but one firearm per house be locked up , that owners register all guns, and that prospective gun owners get training.
Revised:  It also requires that all but one firearm per house be inoperative , that owners register all guns, and that prospective gun owners get training.
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Original:  It also requires that all but one firearm per house be locked up , that owners register all guns, and that prospective gun owners get training.
Revised:  It also requires that all but one firearm per house be locked up , that owners register all guns, and that citizens buying guns receive training.
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Original:  After the ordinance was passed, many gun rights advocates cried foul, and many, including the National Rifle Association (NRA ) promised lawsuits.
Revised:  After the ordinance was passed, many gun rights advocates cried foul, and many, including the National Rifle Association (NRA ,) said they would pursue lawsuits.
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Original: The National Rifle Association has vowed to fight the new handgun regulations.
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Original:  They were only slightly injured   .
Revised:  They were only slightly injured . .
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Original:  After a whil , it sunk completely.
Revised:  After a while , it sunk completely.
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Original: Around noon , a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashes into the sea near Shun Tak Centre due to mechanical failure with 13 on broad.
Revised: Around noon , a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashes into the sea near Shun Tak Centre due to mechanical failure with thirteen on broad.
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Original:  Marine Police, Fire Services , the Civil Aviation Department and the Marine Department sent rescue ships immediately.
Revised:  Marine police, fire services , the Civil Aviation Department and the Marine Department sent rescue ships immediately.
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Original:  The involved helicopter is manufactured by Agusta Westland, Model AW139
Revised:  The involved helicopter is an AgustaWestland AW139
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Original: Around noon yesterday a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashes into the sea near  Shun Tak Centre due to mechanical failure with thirteen on broad.
Revised: Around noon yesterday a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashed into the sea near Shun Tak Centre due to mechanical failure with thirteen on broad.
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Original: Around noon yesterday a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashed into the sea near Hong Kong's Shun Tak Centre due to mechanical failure with thirteen on broad .
Revised: Around noon yesterday a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashed into the sea near Hong Kong's Shun Tak Centre with thirteen on broad .
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Original: Around noon yesterday a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashed into the sea near Hong Kong's Shun Tak Centre due to mechanical failure with thirteen on broad .
Revised: Around noon yesterday a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashed into the sea near Hong Kong's Shun Tak Centre due to mechanical failure with thirteen on board .
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Original:   Marine police, fire services, the Civil Aviation Department and the Marine Department  sent rescue ships immediately .
Revised:  Marine police, fire services, the Civil Aviation Department and the Marine Department immediately sent rescue ships immediately .
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Original: Around noon yesterday a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashed into the sea near Hong Kong's Shun Tak Centre with thirteen on board.
Revised: At around noon yesterday, a Heli-Express helicopter heading towards Macau crashed into the sea near Hong Kong's Shun Tak Centre with thirteen on board.
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Original:  The violence began after two teens died when a police car collided with their motorbike   
Revised:  The violence began after two teens died when a police car collided with their motorbike . 
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Original:  Sow will spend the next nine years in prison  [    
Revised:  Sow will spend the next nine years in prison . [ 
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Original:  A spokesperson for the Nigerian Navy, David Nabaida, said that "boats have gone to receive them from the fishing trawler .
Revised:  A spokesperson for the Nigerian Navy, David Nabaida, said that the navy have gone to receive them from the fishing trawler .
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Original:  A spokesperson for the Nigerian Navy, David Nabaida, said that "boats have gone to receive them from the fishing trawler .
Revised:  A spokesperson for the Nigerian Navy, David Nabaida, said that "boats have gone to meet the fishing trawler .
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Original:  I don't know who is behind them , but I think it's one of the factions of the ex-militants . "  Kidnappings such as this are common in the Niger Delta area, with most being for ransom.
Revised:  I don't know who is behind the attack , but I think it's one of the factions of the ex-militants . " Kidnappings such as this are common in the Niger Delta area, with most being for ransom.
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Original:  I don't know who is behind them , but I think it's one of the factions of the ex-militants . "  Kidnappings such as this are common in the Niger Delta area, with most being for ransom.
Revised:  I don't know who is behind them , but I think it's one of the factions of the ex-militants , " Kidnappings such as this are common in the Niger Delta area, with most being for ransom.
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Original:  I don't know who is behind them , but I think it's one of the factions of the ex-militants . "  Kidnappings such as this are common in the Niger Delta area, with most being for ransom.
Revised:  I don't know who is behind them , but I think it's one of the factions of the ex-militants . " he said. Kidnappings such as this are common in the Niger Delta area, with most being for ransom.
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Original:  The region is the site of the largest oil-producing industry on the continent, and has a high rate of crime
Revised:  The region is the site of the largest oil-producing industries on the continent, and has a high rate of crime
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Original: 244px|The plane, headed from Lima to Pucallpa to Iquitos, crashed outside Pucallpa at 21:20 UTC.
Revised: Location of Peru
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Original: The pilot contacted the Pecallpa airport saying he could not land because of strong winds and a heavy storm, said Norma Pasquel, an airport receptionist.
Revised: The pilot contacted the Pucallpa airport saying he could not land because of strong winds and a heavy storm, said Norma Pasquel, an airport receptionist.
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Original:  The plane was on a flight from Lima to Pucallpa to Iquitos .
Revised:  The plane was on a flight from Lima to Iquitos via Pucallpa .
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Original:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquakes has hit east coast of Honshu, Japan on Monday early morning, USGS reported .
Revised:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquakes hit the near the east coast of Honshu, Japan on Monday early morning, USGS reported .
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Original:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquakes has hit east coast of Honshu, Japan on Monday early morning, USGS reported .
Revised:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquakes has hit east coast of Honshu, Japan early on Monday morning, according to the USGS .
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Original:  The earthquake reached a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers at the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers at the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers at the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers at the northeast of Tokyo.
Revised:  The earthquake occurred at a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers at the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers at the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers at the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers at the northeast of Tokyo.
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Original:  No tsunami warnings were issued, and no major damage was expected from this earthquake
Revised:  No tsunami warnings were issued, and no major damage was expected from the earthquake
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Original: The earthquake occurred at a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers at the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers at the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers at the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers at the northeast of Tokyo.
Revised: The earthquake occurred at a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers to the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers at the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers at the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers at the northeast of Tokyo.
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Original: The earthquake occurred at a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers at the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers at the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers at the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers at the northeast of Tokyo.
Revised: The earthquake occurred at a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers at the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers to the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers at the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers at the northeast of Tokyo.
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Original: The earthquake occurred at a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers at the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers at the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers at the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers at the northeast of Tokyo.
Revised: The earthquake occurred at a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers at the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers at the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers to the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers at the northeast of Tokyo.
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Original: The earthquake occurred at a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers at the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers at the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers at the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers at the northeast of Tokyo.
Revised: The earthquake occurred at a depth of 23.7 kilometres (14.7 miles) and the epicentre was located 120 kilometers at the east of Morioka, Honshu, 125 kilometers at the southeast of Hachinohe, 195 kilometers at the southeast of Aomori, Honshu and 510 kilometers to the northeast of Tokyo.
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Original:  No tsunami warnings were issued, and no major damagewas expected from the earthquake
Revised:  No tsunami warnings were issued, and the quake was not reported to have caused any major damage
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Original:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquakes hit the near the east coast of Honshu, Japan early on Monday morning, according to the USGS.
Revised:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquake hit the near the east coast of Honshu, Japan early on Monday morning, according to the USGS.
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Original:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquake hit the near the east coast of Honshu, Japan early on Monday morning, according to the USGS.
Revised:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquake hit near the east coast of Honshu, Japan early on Monday morning, according to the USGS.
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Original:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquake hit near the east coast of Honshu, Japan early on Monday morning, according to the USGS.
Revised:  A 6.4 magnitude earthquake hit near the east coast of Honshu, Japan early Monday morning, according to the USGS.
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Original: File:Demolition of Pichilemu post office.jpg| Demolition of the post office building in Pichilemu.
Revised:  Demolition of the post office building in Pichilemu.
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Original:  Pichilemu, Chile former post office building has been demolished today .
Revised:  The old post office building has been demolished today .
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Original:  The demolishing process took 2 days, between Saturday and Sunday  .
Revised:  The demolishing process took two days, the Saturday and Sunday .
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Original:  It was not going to be demolished , but the decision was taken after the March 11 earthquake took place
Revised:  It was not scheduled to be demolished , but the decision was taken after the March 11 earthquake took place
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Original:  The building was located in front to Pichilemu's police station.
Revised:  The building was located in front of Pichilemu's police station.
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Original:  It was not scheduled to be demolished before the two earthquakes with the decision being taken after the March 11 earthquake took place
Revised:  It was not scheduled to be demolished before the two earthquakes occurred, as the decision was made after the March 11 earthquake took place
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Original: According to the an official at the Iranian Airlines Union, Mehdi Aliyari, "[Iranian] planes have been refused fuel at airports in Britain, Germany and UAE because of the sanctions imposed by America.
Revised: According to an official at the Iranian Airlines Union, Mehdi Aliyari, "[Iranian] planes have been refused fuel at airports in Britain, Germany and UAE because of the sanctions imposed by America.
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Original:  An unnamed source at the Abu Dhabi Airports Company said that "[a] servicing company which provides fuelling at several airports around the world has refused to provide Iranian planes with fuel, including at UAE terminals."
Revised:  An unnamed source involved in the UAE's airline industry said that "[a] servicing company which provides fuelling at several airports around the world has refused to provide Iranian planes with fuel, including at UAE terminals."
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Original: Electric utilities were concerned about the effect of the heat on infrastructure;
Revised: Electric utility companies were concerned about the effect of the heat on infrastructure;
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Original:  the number has decreased to around 400, but is expected to rise again later  Tuesday
Revised:  the number has decreased to around 400, but is expected to rise again later on Tuesday
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Original: Electric utility companies were concerned about the effect of the heat on infrastructure;
Revised: Electric utility companies are concerned about the effect of the heat on infrastructure;
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Original:  BP also reported that a third of the oil captured was subsequently burned off.
Revised:  BP reported as well that a third of the oil captured was subsequently burned off.
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Original:  This indicates that the oil spill recovery operations may have began to stabilize, even as strong storms threaten to prohibit efforts.
Revised:  This indicates that the oil spill recovery operations may have begun to stabilize, even as strong storms threaten to prohibit efforts.
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Original: BP reported Tuesday that it captured nearly 25,000 barrels of crude oil  from the Deepwater Horizon oil spill yesterday in the Gulf of Mexico.
Revised: BP reported Tuesday that it captured nearly 25,000 barrels of crude oil from the Deepwater Horizon oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico.
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Original: As of July 5, BP has collected about 657,300 barrels of oil, with an estimated flow rate of  12,000 to 19,000 barrels per day.
Revised: As of July 5, BP has collected about 657,300 barrels of oil, with an estimated flow rate of about 12,000 to 19,000 barrels per day.
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Original: Unlike with Jenas, the red cards issued to Welsh and Konchesky will remain on their disciplinary records because the referees involved were unwilling to admit their mistakes.
Revised: Unlike with Jenas, the red cards issued to Welsh and Konchesky will remain on their disciplinary records because the referees involved do not agree that they made mistakes.
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Original: The Football Association of England risked a backlash and possible disciplinary action from football's world governing body FIFA on Tuesday when it rescinded the suspensions due from red cards that had been given during the past weekend's matches to FA Premier League players Andrew Welsh of Sunderland and Paul Konchesky of West Ham United.
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Original:  Although the FA has now permitted Jenas, Welsh and Konchesky to play after being sent off in a previous match, it also extended an automatic three-match ban imposed on Southend United's Freddy Eastwood by one additional match after its disciplinary panel deemed his appeal of a red card received the previous weekend to be " frivolous.
Revised:  Another " frivolous.
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Original:  Although the FA has now permitted Jenas, Welsh and Konchesky to play after being sent off in a previous match, it also extended an automatic three-match ban imposed on Southend United's Freddy Eastwood by one additional match after its disciplinary panel deemed his appeal of a red card received the previous weekend to be " frivolous.
Revised:  Although the FA has now permitted Jenas, Welsh and Konchesky to play after being sent off in a previous match, it also extended an automatic three-match ban imposed on Southend United's Freddy Eastwood by one additional match after its disciplinary panel deemed his appeal of a red card received the previous weekend to be " Able Danger
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Original: Another "Able Danger" operative,Captain Scott Phillpott, said ;"I will not discuss this outside of my chain of command.
Revised: Another "Able Danger" operative,Captain Scott Phillpott, gave a statement stating ;"I will not discuss this outside of my chain of command.
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Original: Another "Able Danger" operative, Captain Scott Phillpott, gave a statement stating ;
Revised: Another "Able Danger" operative, Captain Scott Phillpott, gave a statement stating ,
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Original:  Atta was identified by Able Danger in January/February 2000." Pentagon spokesman, Larry DiRita said;
Revised:  Atta was identified by Able Danger in January/February 2000." Pentagon spokesman, Larry DiRita , said,
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Original:  If the Netherlands win, it will be their first World Cup final appearance since 1978, when they lost 3-1 to Argentina, who was playing on their home turf.
Revised:  This will be their first World Cup final appearance since 1978, when they lost 3-1 to Argentina, who was playing on their home turf.
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Original: The Netherlands will either face Spain or Germany in the 2010 FIFA World Cup final on Sunday, July 11.
Revised: The Netherlands 
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Original:  The Netherlands defeated Uruguay in the semifinals of the 2010 FIFA World Cup on Tuesday.
Revised:  defeated Uruguay in the semifinals of the 2010 FIFA World Cup on Tuesday.
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Original:  Police were still looking for the abductor when he reportedly shot and killed himself around 4:30 p.m. CDT (2130 UTC) Wednesday afternoon.
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Original:  Louisiana is about 80 miles (128.7 kilometres) north of St. Louis and is situated next to the Mississippi River  
Revised:  Louisiana is about 80 miles (128.7 kilometres) north of St. Louis and is situated next to the Mississippi River . 
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Original: On Wednesday afternoon, law enforcement officials were following a man driving a dark car to a home in Hawk Point, Missouri when the man reportedly shot and killed himself around 4:30 p.m. CDT (2130 UTC).
Revised: On Wednesday afternoon, law enforcement officials were following a man driving a dark car to a home in Hawk Point, Missouri when the man reportedly shot himself around 4:30 p.m. CDT (2130 UTC).
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Original:  Authorities have not  released the man's identity, but St.
Revised:  Authorities have not officially released the man's identity, but St.
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Original:  The person of interest was listed in "critical condition" Wednesday night, but police have not confirmed reports of his death.
Revised:  Smith was listed in "critical condition" Wednesday night, but police have not confirmed reports of his death.
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Original:  A person of interest in the incident shot and killed himself when approached by police on Wednesday afternoon.
Revised:  A person of interest in the incident shot himself when approached by police on Wednesday afternoon.
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Original:  A tip from one of Smith's relatives was what helped police find him, said one official source
Revised:  A tip from one of Smith's relatives 
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Original:  Smith was listed in "critical condition" Wednesday night, but police have not confirmed reports of his death .
Revised:  Smith was listed in "critical condition" Wednesday night, and later died .
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Original: right Google today released Google Talk (link) in beta, an Instant Messaging (IM) and Voice over IP (VoIP) product using the Jabber protocol (built from XMPP).
Revised: right Google today released Google Talk (link) in beta, an Instant Messaging (IM) and computer-to-computer voice talk product, using the Jabber protocol (built from XMPP).
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Original:  The official client, required for the VoIP functionality, is only available for Windows XP/2000 although existing IM clients such as Gaim and iChat on Mac and GNU/Linux platforms can be used for text chatting   .
Revised:  The official client, required for the voice functionality, is only available for Windows XP/2000 although existing IM clients such as Gaim and iChat on Mac and GNU/Linux platforms can be used for text chatting .
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Original:  The official client, required for the VoIP functionality, is only available for Windows XP/2000 although existing IM clients such as Gaim and iChat on Mac and GNU/Linux platforms can be used for text chatting   .
Revised:  The official client, required for the VoIP functionality, is only available for Windows XP/2000 although existing IM clients such as Gaim and iChat on Mac and GNU/Linux platforms can be used for text chatting . .
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Original: Google Talk logo Google today released Google Talk (link) in beta, an Instant Messaging (IM) and computer-to-computer voice talk product, using the Jabber protocol (built from XMPP).
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Original:  Related stories Google plans free Internet phone service, 24 January, 200
Revised:  NIGGA STOLE MY BIKE! 17922002
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Original: The Australian government and the New South Wales state goverernment are going to fund the Forbes Global CEO Conference, to be held at the Sydney Opera House next week.
Revised: The Australian government and the New South Wales State goverernment are going to fund the Forbes Global CEO Conference, to be held at the Sydney Opera House next week.
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Original:  According to the government, the large police prescence is required because ASIO has assessed the event as "medium risk".
Revised:  According to the government, the large police presence is required because ASIO has assessed the event as "medium risk".
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