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Original:  In addition to the continuing calls for him to leave office, his key privatisation policies had been dealt a serious blow with the privatisation of the state-owned power company EGAT being ruled unlawful.
Revised:  In addition to the continuing calls for him to leave office, his key privatisation policies had been dealt a serious blow by the ruling that the privatisation of the state-owned power company EGAT being ruled unlawful.
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Original:  In addition to the continuing calls for him to leave office, his key privatisation policies had been dealt a serious blow with the privatisation of the state-owned power company EGAT being ruled unlawful.
Revised:  In addition to the continuing calls for him to leave office, his key privatisation policies had been dealt a serious blow with the privatisation of the state-owned power company EGAT was unlawful.
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Original:  Mention of conflicts of interest in the privatisation process adds fuel to the accusations of anti-Thaksin groups  who accuse the PM of leading a goverment that indulges in cronyism.
Revised:  Mention of conflicts of interest in the privatisation process adds fuel to the accusations of anti-Thaksin groups , who accuse the PM of leading a goverment that indulges in cronyism.
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Original: image:Thai party ballot.png| Thailand's 2006 Party ballot Thailand's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) has petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming April 2 election and to postpone it, to bring an end to the current political crisis.
Revised:  Thailand's 2006 Party ballot Thailand's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) has petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming April 2 election and to postpone it, to bring an end to the current political crisis.
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Original: image:Thai party ballot.png| Thailand's 2006 Party ballot Thailand's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) has petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming April 2 election and to postpone it, to bring an end to the current political crisis.
Revised: image:Thai party ballot.png| Thailand's Thailand's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) has petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming April 2 election and to postpone it, to bring an end to the current political crisis.
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Original: image:Thai party ballot.png| Thailand's 2006 Party ballot Thailand's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) has petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming April 2 election and to postpone it, to bring an end to the current political crisis.
Revised: image:Thai party ballot.png| Thailand's 2006 Party ballot People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) has petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming April 2 election and to postpone it, to bring an end to the current political crisis.
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Original: 125px Flag of Thailand Thailand  's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) has petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming April 2 election and to postpone it, to bring an end to the current political crisis.
Revised: image: Flag of Thailand Thailand 's People's Alliance for Democracy (PAD) has petitioned the country's Election Commission to disqualify caretaker Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra from the upcoming April 2 election and to postpone it, to bring an end to the current political crisis.
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Original:  In addition, Parinya expressed doubt that the required 500 MPs would be returned, due to the main opposition party election boycott and the requirement for 20\% of the eligible electorate to vote for a candidate, even when the candidate stands unopposed. image:Thai party ballot.png|Thailand 's 2006 Party ballot Thailand's Democrats, the current main opposition party, who are boycotting the April 2 election, raised doubts over the validity of a number of Thai Rak Thai candidates' listings.
Revised:  In addition, Parinya expressed doubt that the required 500 MPs would be returned, due to the main opposition party election boycott and the requirement for 20\% of the eligible electorate to vote for a candidate, even when the candidate stands unopposed. Thailand 2006 Party ballot Thailand's Democrats, the current main opposition party, who are boycotting the April 2 election, raised doubts over the validity of a number of Thai Rak Thai candidates' listings.
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Original:  The rescue was a joint mission between US, Canadian, and British forces  
Revised:  The rescue was a joint mission between US, Canadian, and British forces . 
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Original:  A fourth member of their group, Tom Fox, an American, was found shot and killed in Baghdad on March 10th  
Revised:  A fourth member of their group, Tom Fox, an American, was found shot and killed in Baghdad on March 10th . 
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Original:  After their rescue, both Canadians required medical attention  according to British Foreign minister Jack Straw
Revised:  After their rescue, both Canadians required medical attention , according to British Foreign minister Jack Straw
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Original:  Their rescuers were acting on information received from an interrogation conducted Wednesday, according to Major General Rick Lynch, a spokesman for the U.S. military .
Revised:  Major General Rick Lynch, a spokesman for the U.S. military .
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Original:  The rescue was a joint mission between US, Canadian, and British forces.
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Original: Three men, James Loney, 41, and Harmeet Singh Sooden, 32, both from Canada, and Norman Kember, 74, of Britain were rescued today by by British SAS and Canadian JTF2 Special Forces in Western Baghdad.
Revised: Three men, James Loney, 41, and Harmeet Singh Sooden, 32, both from Canada, and Norman Kember, 74, of Britain were rescued today by British SAS and Canadian JTF2 Special Forces in Western Baghdad.
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Original:  With no response from the White House another letter was written March 22 by House Minority Leader Nancy Pelosi and Congressman Waxman urging the White House to respond .
Revised:  Another letter was written March 22 by House Minority Leader Nancy Pelosi and Congressman Waxman urging the White House to respond .
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Original:  With no response from the White House another letter was written March 22 by House Minority Leader Nancy Pelosi and Congressman Waxman urging the White House to respond .
Revised:  With no response from the White House another letter was written March 22 by House Minority Leader Nancy Pelosi and Congressman Waxman urging the White House to respond 
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Original: Waxman also suggested  knowing that the Speaker of the House called the White House to inform the President that he did not have the right version of the Bill.
Revised: Waxman also suggested in his letter knowing that the Speaker of the House called the White House to inform the President that he did not have the right version of the Bill.
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Original: Waxman also suggested in his letter knowing that the Speaker of the House  called the White House to inform the President  that he did not have the right version of the Bill.
Revised: Waxman also stated his understanding that the Speaker of the House called the White House to inform the President that he did not have the right version of the Bill.
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Original: Canadian news outlet CP is speculating that Canadian Forces soldiers, specifically of the elite JTF2 unit  may have been involved in the rescue of two Canadian hostages in Baghdad, Iraq.
Revised: Canadian news outlet CP is speculating that Canadian Forces soldiers, specifically of the elite JTF2 unit , may have been involved in the rescue of two Canadian hostages in Baghdad, Iraq.
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Original:  It would be very significant for Canadians if their troops were involved in Iraq  as Canada previously refused to send troops to the US-led coalition
Revised:  It would be very significant for Canadians if their troops were involved in Iraq , as Canada previously refused to send troops to the US-led coalition
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Original:  It would be very significant for Canadians if their troops were involved in Iraq  as Canada previously refused to send troops to the US-led coalition
Revised:  It would be very significant for Canadians if their troops were involved in Iraq as Canada previously refused to contribute troops to the US-led coalition
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Original:  It would be very significant for Canadians if their troops were involved in Iraq, as Canada previously refused to contribute troops to the US-led coalition
Revised:  It would be significant to Canadians if their troops were involved in Iraq, as Canada previously refused to contribute troops to the US-led coalition
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Original:  It would be significant to Canadians if their troops were involved in Iraq, as Canada previously refused to contribute troops to the US-led coalition
Revised:  It would be significant to Canadians if their troops were involved in Iraq, as Canada previously refused to contribute troops to the US-led invasion of Iraq
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Original: A has concluded three patients who had to remove their s died as a result of mistakes during and after the operations.
Revised: A concluded three patients who had to remove their s died as a result of mistakes during and after the operations.
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Original: A has concluded three patients who had to remove their s died as a result of mistakes during and after the operations.
Revised: A has concluded three patients who underwent to remove their s died as a result of mistakes during and after the operations.
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Original: A has concluded three patients who had to remove their s died as a result of mistakes during and after the operations.
Revised: A has concluded three patients who had to remove their died as a result of mistakes during and after the operations.
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Original: A has concluded three patients who had to remove their s died as a result of mistakes during and after the operations.
Revised: A has concluded three patients who had to remove their s died as a result of mistakes during , and after, the operations.
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Original:  Agnes Nicol, George Johnstone, and Andrew Ritchie died within three months of each other in 2006 whilst under state care from in Scotland.
Revised:  Agnes Nicol, George Johnstone, and Andrew Ritchie died within a three-month period in 2006 whilst under state care from in Scotland.
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Original:  Agnes Nicol, George Johnstone, and Andrew Ritchie died within three months of each other in 2006 whilst under state care from in Scotland.
Revised:  Agnes Nicol, George Johnstone, and Andrew Ritchie died within three months of each other in 2006 whilst in the care of in Scotland.
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Original:  A surgeon at mistakenly cut her and her , while her was sutured.
Revised:  A surgeon at mistakenly cut her and her , whilst her was sutured.
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Original:  Her liver was left with 20\% of its normal blood supply  and the errors were not discovered until she was transferred to liver specialists at Edinburgh's . By then, her liver was seriously damaged.
Revised:  Her liver was left with 20\% of its normal blood supply , and the errors were not discovered until she was transferred to liver specialists at Edinburgh's . By then, her liver was seriously damaged.
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Original:  She developed and died of in March 2006.
Revised:  She developed , dying from in March 2006.
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Original:  Later expanded to examine all three deaths, the inquiry was established to look into the case of Nicol, 50, who received surgery in late 2005.
Revised:  Later expanded to look at all three deaths, the inquiry was established to look into the case of Nicol, 50, who received surgery in late 2005.
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Original:  Later expanded to examine all three deaths, the inquiry was established to look into the case of Nicol, 50, who received surgery in late 2005.
Revised:  Later expanded to examine all three deaths, the inquiry initially established to look into the case of Nicol, 50, who received surgery in late 2005.
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Original:  A surgeon at mistakenly cut her and her , whilst her was sutured .
Revised:  A surgeon at mistakenly cut her and her , whilst suturing her .
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Original:  Her liver was left with 20\% of its normal blood supply, and the errors were not discovered until she was transferred to liver specialists at Edinburgh's . Ritchie, 62, died in intensive care a week after an operation in June 2006.
Revised:  Her liver was left with 20\% of its normal blood supply, and the errors were not discovered until her transfer to liver specialists at Edinburgh's . Ritchie, 62, died in intensive care a week after an operation in June 2006.
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Original:  He was killed by an intra abdominal caused by errors during the surgery.
Revised:  He died from intra abdominal caused by errors during the surgery.
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Original:  A surgeon at mistakenly cut her and her , whilst suturing her . Her liver was left with 20\% of its normal blood supply , and the errors were not discovered until her transfer to liver specialists at Edinburgh's .
Revised:  A surgeon at mistakenly cut her and her . Whilst suturing her , her liver was left with 20\% of its normal blood supply , and the errors were not discovered until her transfer to liver specialists at Edinburgh's .
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Original:  A surgeon at mistakenly cut her and her , whilst suturing her . Her liver was left with 20\% of its normal blood supply , and the errors were not discovered until her transfer to liver specialists at Edinburgh's .
Revised:  A surgeon at mistakenly cut her and her , whilst suturing her . Her liver was left with 20\% of its normal blood supply ; the errors were not discovered until her transfer to liver specialists at Edinburgh's .
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Original: Names and ages of those injured by the explosion are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from North America .
Revised: Names and ages of those injured by the explosion are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from the United States .
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Original:  Also affected were Marco Antonio Romero Galindo (20), Iván Quiroga (27), Elizabeth de Quiroga (44) and Ximena Vargas (18) .
Revised:  Also affected were Marco Antonio Romero Galindo (20), Iván Quiroga (27), Elizabeth de Quiroga (44) and Ximena Vargas (18) 
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Original:  This article was translated from the Spanish Wikinoticias Dos explosiones en La Paz dejan dos muertos y seis herid
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Original:  The explosionswere caused with dynamite , according to government attorney Jorge Gutiérrez.
Revised:  Dynamite was used in both explosions , according to government attorney Jorge Gutiérrez.
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Original:  President Evo Morales indicated that the promoters of the incidents were "indistrialists" and "oligarchists" who, "using external agents", claiming to halt the reforms that have been happening in Bolivia.
Revised:  President Evo Morales indicated that the promoters of the incidents were "indistrialists" and "oligarchists" who, "using external agents", claimed to halt the reforms that have been happening in Bolivia.
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Original:  However, authorities also entertained theories of religious motives, because Lestat is a self-proclaimed "minister of pagan rites".
Revised:  However, authorities have not ruled out religious motives, because Lestat is a self-proclaimed "minister of pagan rites".
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Original:  Police said that the Chilean consulate in the Bolivian capital could also be the object of an incident next Saturday ( the 25th ) . Names and ages of those injured by the explosion are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from the United States.
Revised:  Police also announced that the Chilean consulate in the Bolivian capital could also be the object of an incident next Saturday ( the 25th ) . Names and ages of those injured by the explosion are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from the United States.
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Original:  Police said that the Chilean consulate in the Bolivian capital could also be the object of an incident next Saturday ( the 25th ) . Names and ages of those injured by the explosion are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from the United States.
Revised:  Police said that the Chilean consulate in the Bolivian capital was also a target, to be attacked on Saturday the 25th ) . Names and ages of those injured by the explosion are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from the United States.
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Original:  Police said that the Chilean consulate in the Bolivian capital could also be the object of an incident next Saturday ( the 25th ) . Names and ages of those injured by the explosion are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from the United States.
Revised:  Police said that the Chilean consulate in the Bolivian capital could also be the object of an incident next Saturday ( the 25th . Names and ages of those injured by the explosion are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from the United States.
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Original:  Police said that the Chilean consulate in the Bolivian capital could also be the object of an incident next Saturday ( the 25th ) . Names and ages of those injured by the explosion are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from the United States.
Revised:  Police said that the Chilean consulate in the Bolivian capital could also be the object of an incident next Saturday ( the 25th ) . Names and ages of the victims of the explosions are: Marlene Patzi Tapia (26), Cristian López (26), Alva Natividad Heredia (44), and Jessica Wilson (24), the last from the United States.
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Original: President Evo Morales indicated that the promoters of the incidents were " indistrialists " and "oligarchists" who, "using external agents", claimed to halt the reforms that have been happening in Bolivia.
Revised: President Evo Morales indicated that the promoters of the incidents were " industrialists " and "oligarchists" who, "using external agents", claimed to halt the reforms that have been happening in Bolivia.
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Original:  Destruction left by one of the explosions.
Revised: frame| Destruction left by one of the explosions.
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Original: Virologists believe that the H5N1 strain of bird flu does not spread between humans because  it infects humans too low in the respiratory tract .
Revised: Virologists believe that the H5N1 strain of bird flu does not spread between humans because where it infects humans too low in the respiratory tract .
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Original:  Human flu instead is most prevalent in the mucous lining of the nose and sinuses as well as the throat, windpipe and bronchi.
Revised:  Human flu is instead most prevalent in the mucous lining of the nose and sinuses as well as the throat, windpipe and bronchi.
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Original:   They discovered that bird flu tends to be found among alveoli deep in the lungs.
Revised:  Professor Kawaoka's team discovered that bird flu tends to be found among alveoli deep in the lungs.
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Original:  These mutations would have to affect where the virus binds to in the human body and affect the way in which it reproduces  
Revised:  These mutations would have to affect where the virus binds to in the human body and affect the way in which it reproduces . 
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Original: US and Japanese scientists, led by Professor Yoshihiro Kawaoka at the University of Wisconsin at Madison, found that avian influenza and human influenza viruses infect different cells in the respiratory tract.
Revised: US and Japanese scientists, led by Professor Yoshihiro Kawaoka at the University of Wisconsin at Madison, found that avian influenza and human influenza viruses infect different tissues in the respiratory tract.
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Original:  Another group of scientists, based at the University of Rotterdam, have also published similar results.
Revised:  Another group of scientists, based at the University of Rotterdam, has also published similar results.
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Original:  Human flu is instead most prevalent in the mucous lining of the nose and sinuses  as well as the throat, windpipe and bronchi.
Revised:  Human flu is instead most prevalent in the mucous lining of the nose and sinuses , as well as the throat, windpipe and bronchi.
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Original:  When an infected person coughs or sneezes, tiny droplets containing the virus are released into the air where other humans can come into contact and be infected.
Revised:  When an infected person coughs or sneezes, tiny droplets containing the virus are released into the air , which other humans can come into contact and be infected.
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Original:  When an infected person coughs or sneezes, tiny droplets containing the virus are released into the air where other humans can come into contact and be infected.
Revised:  When an infected person coughs or sneezes, tiny droplets containing the virus are released into the air where other humans can inhale, becoming infected.
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Original:  As bird flu infects the alveoli, it doesn't cause coughing or sneezing  and heavy exposure to the virus is required before it can get to the lungs.
Revised:  As bird flu infects the alveoli, it doesn't cause coughing or sneezing , and heavy exposure to the virus is required before it can get to the lungs.
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Original:  Professor Kawaoka said  "For the viruses to be transmitted efficiently, they have to multiply in the upper portion of the respiratory system so that they can be transmitted by coughing and sneezing ".
Revised:  Professor Kawaoka said , "For the viruses to be transmitted efficiently, they have to multiply in the upper portion of the respiratory system so that they can be transmitted by coughing and sneezing ".
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Original:  Professor Kawaoka said  "For the viruses to be transmitted efficiently, they have to multiply in the upper portion of the respiratory system so that they can be transmitted by coughing and sneezing ".
Revised:  Professor Kawaoka said "For the viruses to be transmitted efficiently, they have to multiply in the upper portion of the respiratory system so that they can be transmitted by coughing and sneezing ."
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Original:  For H5N1 to be easily transmitted among humans it would need to undergo multiple mutations  according to Professor Kawaoka.
Revised:  For H5N1 to be transmitted easily among humans, it would need to undergo multiple mutations according to Professor Kawaoka.
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