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Original:  Aijo was active in the 2014 Annexation of Crimea by the Russian Federation and the pro-Russian unrest in Ukraine and is currently active in the War in Donbass , aligned with The Other Russia's paramilitary grop, (the) Interbrigades.
Revised:  Aijo was active in the 2014 Annexation of Crimea by the Russian Federation and the pro-Russian unrest in Ukraine and is currently active in the War in Donbas , aligned with The Other Russia's paramilitary grop, (the) Interbrigades.
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Original:  Aijo was active in the 2014 Annexation of Crimea by the Russian Federation and the pro-Russian unrest in Ukraine and is currently active in the War in Donbas , aligned with The Other Russia's paramilitary grop, (the) Interbrigades.
Revised:  Aijo was active in the 2014 Annexation of Crimea by the Russian Federation and the pro-Russian unrest in Ukraine and is currently active in the War in Donbass , aligned with The Other Russia's paramilitary grop, (the) Interbrigades.
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Original: Pro-Russian people of the 2014 pro-Russian unrest in Ukraine Category:Latvian politicians Category: Russian communists Category:Russian nationalists Category:Russian dissidents Category:Prisoners and detainees of Latvia Category:Prisoners and detainees of the Netherlands Category:Prisoners and detainees of Ukraine Category:Pro-Russian people of the war in Donbas Category:21st-century Latvian politicians Category:National Bolsheviks Category:Neo-Stalinis
Revised: Pro-Russian people of the 2014 pro-Russian unrest in Ukraine Category:Latvian politicians Category: Latvian communists Category:Prisoners and detainees of Latvia Category:Prisoners and detainees of the Netherlands Category:Prisoners and detainees of Ukraine Category:Pro-Russian people of the war in Donbas Category:21st-century Latvian politicians Category:National Bolsheviks Category:Neo-Stalinis
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Original: History File:Transoxiana 8th century.svg|Map of Khurasan, Transoxiana and Tokharistan Khuttal, along with other regions, was originally under Hephthalite rule, but as the Hephthalite kingdom began to weaken, local dynasties in Khuttal, Chaghaniyan, and other regions, began to assert their rule over them.
Revised: History Khuttal, along with other regions, was originally under Hephthalite rule, but as the Hephthalite kingdom began to weaken, local dynasties in Khuttal, Chaghaniyan, and other regions, began to assert their rule over them.
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Original: Indian women musicologists Category:Indian musicologists Category:  Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian women classical musicians Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian musicians Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Musicians from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:20th-century Indian women artists Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women artists from Tamil Na
Revised: Indian women musicologists Category:Indian musicologists Category: 20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian women classical musicians Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian musicians Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Musicians from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:20th-century Indian women artists Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women artists from Tamil Na
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Original: Indian musicologists Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian women classical musicians Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian musicians Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Musicians from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:20th-century Indian women artists Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women artists from Tamil Na
Revised: Indian musicologists Category:20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian women classical musicians Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian musicians Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Musicians from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:20th-century Indian women artists Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women artists from Tamil Nadu Category:20th-century women musicia
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Original: 20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian women classical musicians Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian musicians Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Musicians from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:20th-century Indian women artists Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women artists from Tamil Nadu Category:20th-century women musicia
Revised: 20th-century Indian non-fiction writers Category:Indian women classical musicians Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian musicians Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Musicians from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:20th-century Indian women artists Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women artists from Tamil Nadu Category:20th-century women singe
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Original: Indian women classical musicians Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Singers from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women artists from Tamil Nadu Category:20th-century Indian women singers Category:20th-century Indian singers Category:21st-century Indian women singers Category:21st-century Indian singe
Revised: Indian women classical musicians Category:Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Singers from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women artists from Tamil Nadu Category:20th-century Indian women singers Category:20th-century Indian singers Category:21st-century Indian women singers Category:21st-century Indian singers Category:Women educators from Tamil Na
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Original: Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Singers from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women musicians from Tamil Nadu Category:20th-century Indian women singers Category:20th-century Indian singers Category:21st-century Indian women singers Category:21st-century Indian singers Category:Women educators from Tamil Na
Revised: Recipients of the Sangeet Natak Akademi Award Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Singers from Tamil Nadu Category:People from Kanyakumari district Category:Educators from Tamil Nadu Category:Women writers from Tamil Nadu Category:Women musicians from Tamil Nadu Category:20th-century Indian women singers Category:20th-century Indian singers Category:21st-century Indian women singers Category:21st-century Indian singers Category:Women educators from Tamil Nadu Category:20th-century women write
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Original:  She started learning music from an early age under Karnatic music guru, Thiruvattar Arumugham Pillai Bhagavathar, along with her younger brother, late Kamukara Purushothaman, a known classical and playback singer in URL Hailing from a family of musicians, she had the opportunity to hone her music talents under the guidance of her grand mother and mother who were musicians in their own rights.
Revised:  She started learning music from an early age under Karnatic music guru, Thiruvattar Arumugham Pillai Bhagavathar, along with her younger brother, late Kamukara Purushothaman, a known classical and playback singer in Malayalam. Hailing from a family of musicians, she had the opportunity to hone her music talents under the guidance of her grand mother and mother who were musicians in their own rights.
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Original:  Her Master's degree came from Meerut University and she got her PhD in music from Delhi URL Career Leela Omchery is presently working as a Professor in Kamukara School of Music, Dance and Research Studies, Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala and as Professor and Principal of Trikalaa Gurukulam in URL
Revised:  Her Master's degree came from Meerut University and she got her PhD in music from Delhi University. Career Leela Omchery is presently working as a Professor in Kamukara School of Music, Dance and Research Studies, Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala and as Professor and Principal of Trikalaa Gurukulam in URL
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Original:  Her Master's degree came from Meerut University and she got her PhD in music from Delhi URL Career Leela Omchery is presently working as a Professor in Kamukara School of Music, Dance and Research Studies, Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala and as Professor and Principal of Trikalaa Gurukulam in URL
Revised:  Her Master's degree came from Meerut University and she got her PhD in music from Delhi URL Career Leela Omchery is presently working as a Professor in Kamukara School of Music, Dance and Research Studies, Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala and as Professor and Principal of Trikalaa Gurukulam in Delhi.
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Original:   She started learning music from an early age under Karnatic music guru, Thiruvattar Arumugham Pillai Bhagavathar, along with her younger brother, late Kamukara Purushothaman, a known classical and playback singer in Malayalam.
Revised:  Her parents were Parameswara Kurup and Lakshmikutty Amma. She started learning music from an early age under Karnatic music guru, Thiruvattar Arumugham Pillai Bhagavathar, along with her younger brother, late Kamukara Purushothaman, a known classical and playback singer in Malayalam.
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Original:  In the United States, researchers at the University of Michigan C.S. Mott Children ’ s Hospital found that almost 75\% of American parents were familiar with someone who over-shared information about their child on social media, and an AVG survey determined that 92\% of all American two-year-olds had some presence on the internet.
Revised:  In the United States, researchers at the University of Michigan C.S. Mott Children ' s Hospital found that almost 75\% of American parents were familiar with someone who over-shared information about their child on social media, and an AVG survey determined that 92\% of all American two-year-olds had some presence on the internet.
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Original:  Alternatively, some have suggested that these online expressions indicate the infiltration of individual pride into the sphere of parenting, as family photography becomes a means to “show off” one ’ s children to the others and strengthens a parent ’ s sense of individuated self.
Revised:  Alternatively, some have suggested that these online expressions indicate the infiltration of individual pride into the sphere of parenting, as family photography becomes a means to “show off” one ' s children to the others and strengthens a parent ’ s sense of individuated self.
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Original:  Alternatively, some have suggested that these online expressions indicate the infiltration of individual pride into the sphere of parenting, as family photography becomes a means to “show off” one ’ s children to the others and strengthens a parent ’ s sense of individuated self.
Revised:  Alternatively, some have suggested that these online expressions indicate the infiltration of individual pride into the sphere of parenting, as family photography becomes a means to “show off” one ’ s children to the others and strengthens a parent ' s sense of individuated self.
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Original:  Controversy While some people assert that online platforms enable parents to establish a community and seek parenting support, others are concerned about the children ’ s data privacy and their lack of informed consent.
Revised:  Controversy While some people assert that online platforms enable parents to establish a community and seek parenting support, others are concerned about the children ' s data privacy and their lack of informed consent.
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Original:  Law Professor Stacy Steinberg argues that minors strive to protect their private information from public exposure -- in particular, content that may be potentially inappropriate -- and thus may not agree with their parents' relatively facile decisions to share them on social media, regardless of their parents’ intention.
Revised:  Law Professor Stacy Steinberg argues that minors strive to protect their private information from public exposure — in particular, content that may be potentially inappropriate -- and thus may not agree with their parents' relatively facile decisions to share them on social media, regardless of their parents’ intention.
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Original:  Law Professor Stacy Steinberg argues that minors strive to protect their private information from public exposure -- in particular, content that may be potentially inappropriate -- and thus may not agree with their parents' relatively facile decisions to share them on social media, regardless of their parents’ intention.
Revised:  Law Professor Stacy Steinberg argues that minors strive to protect their private information from public exposure -- in particular, content that may be potentially inappropriate — and thus may not agree with their parents' relatively facile decisions to share them on social media, regardless of their parents’ intention.
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Original:  Applicable Legislation There appears to be little guiding legislation regarding parents’ online control over their children ’ s media.
Revised:  Applicable Legislation There appears to be little guiding legislation regarding parents’ online control over their children ' s media.
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Original:  While different countries have their respective laws to protect children ’ s privacy, most hand over the responsibility to the children ’ s guardians, which sharenting may exploit as the parent is able to take advantage of their child ’ s power to consent.
Revised:  While different countries have their respective laws to protect children ' s privacy, most hand over the responsibility to the children ’ s guardians, which sharenting may exploit as the parent is able to take advantage of their child ’ s power to consent.
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Original:  While different countries have their respective laws to protect children ’ s privacy, most hand over the responsibility to the children ’ s guardians, which sharenting may exploit as the parent is able to take advantage of their child ’ s power to consent.
Revised:  While different countries have their respective laws to protect children ’ s privacy, most hand over the responsibility to the children ' s guardians, which sharenting may exploit as the parent is able to take advantage of their child ’ s power to consent.
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Original:  While different countries have their respective laws to protect children ’ s privacy, most hand over the responsibility to the children ’ s guardians, which sharenting may exploit as the parent is able to take advantage of their child ’ s power to consent.
Revised:  While different countries have their respective laws to protect children ’ s privacy, most hand over the responsibility to the children ’ s guardians, which sharenting may exploit as the parent is able to take advantage of their child ' s power to consent.
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Original:  This presumption in favor of the parent fails to protect the child ’ s privacy from their parents.
Revised:  This presumption in favor of the parent fails to protect the child ' s privacy from their parents.
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Original:  Article 14 outlines the applicable legal guardians’ duty to represent the child ’ s best interest.
Revised:  Article 14 outlines the applicable legal guardians’ duty to represent the child ' s best interest.
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Original:  GDPR ’ s Recital 18 cites that the regulation of content does not apply to “personal or household activities” as long as there is no commercialization.
Revised:  GDPR ' s Recital 18 cites that the regulation of content does not apply to “personal or household activities” as long as there is no commercialization.
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Original:  In 2020, the Dutch courts ruled in favor of the parent after a grandmother had posted media of her grandchild online without the parent ’ s consent.
Revised:  In 2020, the Dutch courts ruled in favor of the parent after a grandmother had posted media of her grandchild online without the parent ' s consent.
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Original:  Nonetheless, the court declared that the grandmother ’ s sharenting was illegal under the European Union ’ s bylaws.
Revised:  Nonetheless, the court declared that the grandmother ' s sharenting was illegal under the European Union ’ s bylaws.
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Original:  Nonetheless, the court declared that the grandmother ’ s sharenting was illegal under the European Union ’ s bylaws.
Revised:  Nonetheless, the court declared that the grandmother ’ s sharenting was illegal under the European Union ' s bylaws.
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Original:  United States of America In the United States, the Children ’ s Online Privacy Protection Act (COPPA) was enacted in 1998 to protect the data collection of children under the age of 13.
Revised:  United States of America In the United States, the Children ' s Online Privacy Protection Act (COPPA) was enacted in 1998 to protect the data collection of children under the age of 13.
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Original:  YouTube went under fire in 2019 after the Federal Trade Commission (FTC) found the media platform was violating COPPA by sharing children ’ s information without parental consent.
Revised:  YouTube went under fire in 2019 after the Federal Trade Commission (FTC) found the media platform was violating COPPA by sharing children ' s information without parental consent.
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Original:  Some senators argued that this ruling weakened children ’ s right to their own digital data privacy by further emphasizing parental power over children online.
Revised:  Some senators argued that this ruling weakened children ' s right to their own digital data privacy by further emphasizing parental power over children online.
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Original:  Sharenting is a widely unregulated topic under COPPA since the legislation presumes that parents are the primary protectors of their children ’ s privacy.
Revised:  Sharenting is a widely unregulated topic under COPPA since the legislation presumes that parents are the primary protectors of their children ' s privacy.
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Original:  Rather than protecting children ’ s data from their parents, COPPA focuses on the protection of data from corporations.
Revised:  Rather than protecting children ' s data from their parents, COPPA focuses on the protection of data from corporations.
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Original:  COPPA ’ s requirement of “verifiable parental consent” was relevant under Google ’ s alleged violation for the children under 13.
Revised:  COPPA ' s requirement of “verifiable parental consent” was relevant under Google ’ s alleged violation for the children under 13.
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Original:  COPPA ’ s requirement of “verifiable parental consent” was relevant under Google ’ s alleged violation for the children under 13.
Revised:  COPPA ’ s requirement of “verifiable parental consent” was relevant under Google ' s alleged violation for the children under 13.
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Original:  While the photos are not protected by BIPA, scanning them was a breach of one ’ s biometric privacy.
Revised:  While the photos are not protected by BIPA, scanning them was a breach of one ' s biometric privacy.
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Original:  While Youtube has pledged to work with the National Center for Missing and Exploited Children to convict accounts suspected of harm to children, sharenting in the realm of family vlogging is uncharted territory.
Revised:  While YouTube has pledged to work with the National Center for Missing and Exploited Children to convict accounts suspected of harm to children, sharenting in the realm of family vlogging is uncharted territory.
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Original:  However, the blurred lines of family vlogging makes it difficult to log hours to calculate pay and labor intensive hours.
Revised:  However, the blurred lines of family vlogging makes it difficult to log hours to calculate pay and labor-intensive hours.
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Original:  The Fair Labor Standards Act that protects children against “oppressive child labor” is yet to be updated to the varied labor intensive work on social media.
Revised:  The Fair Labor Standards Act that protects children against “oppressive child labor” is yet to be updated to the varied labor-intensive work on social media.
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Original:  The parents were accused of neglect of their 9 and 11 year old children.
Revised:  The parents were accused of neglect of their 9 and 11-year-old children.
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Original: Further reading Faireparterie (2018-09-20) "La digitalisation de la vie familiale - Parents, enfants et écrans" (in French).
Revised:  Faireparterie (2018-09-20) "La digitalisation de la vie familiale - Parents, enfants et écrans" (in French).
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Original: Further reading Faireparterie (2018-09-20) "La digitalisation de la vie familiale - Parents, enfants et écrans" (in French).
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Original:  The World Health Organization defines perinatal mortality as the "number of stillbirths and deaths in the first week of life per 1,000 total births, the perinatal period commences at 22 completed weeks (154 days) of gestation, and ends seven completed days after birth", but other definitions have been used.
Revised:  The World Health Organization defines perinatal mortality as the "number of stillbirths and deaths in the first week of life per 1,000 total births, the perinatal period commences at 22 completed weeks (154 days) of URL and ends seven completed days after birth", but other definitions have been used.
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Original:  The World Health Organization defines perinatal mortality as the "number of stillbirths and deaths in the first week of life per 1,000 total births, the perinatal period commences at 22 completed weeks (154 days) of URL and ends seven completed days after birth", but other definitions have been used.
Revised:  The World Health Organization defines perinatal mortality as the "number of stillbirths and deaths in the first week of life per 1,000 total births, the perinatal period commences at 22 completed weeks (154 days) of gestation, and ends seven completed days after birth", but other definitions have been used.
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Original:  He was also an employee of Travancore Radio Station in Thiruvannathapuram , which later got merged with All India Radio.
Revised:  He was also an employee of Travancore Radio Station in Thiruvananthapuram , which later got merged with All India Radio.
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Original:  Thirunainar Kurichi and music director Brother Lakshmanan were the hit duo of the 1950s and 60s.
Revised:  Thirunainar Kurichi and music director Brother Lakshmanan were a hit duo during the 1950s and 60s.
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Original:  He died aged 49 at Thiruvananthapuram Medical College on 1 April 1965.
Revised:  He died aged 49 at Trivandrum Medical College on 1 April 1965.
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Original: Thirunainarkurichi Madhavan Nair was an Indian poet, novelist and lyricist.
Revised: Thirunainar Kurichi Madhavan Nair was an Indian poet, novelist and lyricist.
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