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Original:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but due to EMS going bankrupt a short time after their 2000 event was ran and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter , the Easter event was canned .
Revised:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but due to EMS going bankrupt a short time after their 2000 event and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter , the Easter event was canned .
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Original:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but due to EMS going bankrupt a short time after their 2000 event was ran and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter , the Easter event was canned .
Revised:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but due to EMS going bankrupt a short time after their 2000 event was ran and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter .
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Original:  The BIMF is inpired by the Festival of Speed and Goodwood Revival in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The BIMF is inspired by the Festival of Speed and Goodwood Revival in the United Kingdom.
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Original: The BIMF will be the first event to be held at the 6.2 kilometre circuit over Easter since 2000.
Revised: The BIMF will be the first event to be held at the 6.2 kilometer circuit over Easter since 2000.
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Original:  Off the track, the organisers have promised manufacturer displayes , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry
Revised:  Off the track, the organizers have promised manufacturer displayes , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry
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Original:  Off the track, the organisers have promised manufacturer displayes , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry
Revised:  Off the track, the organisers have promised manufacturer displays , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry
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Original:  She has been a foster mother for over 200 children, and as the citation elaborates "for 15 years, she has been on call to care for lost, abused and bewildered children in heartbreaking circumstances.
Revised:  She has been a mother for over 200 children, and as the citation elaborates "for 15 years, she has been on call to care for lost, abused and bewildered children in heartbreaking circumstances.
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Original:  She has been a mother for over 200 children, and as the citation elaborates "for 15 years, she has been on call to care for lost, abused and bewildered children in heartbreaking circumstances.  
Revised:  She has been a mother for over 200 children, and as the citation elaborates "for 15 years, she has been on call to care for lost, abused and bewildered children in heartbreaking circumstances. " 
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Original:  She founded in 2008 to address the low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields.
Revised:  Cheng founded in 2008 to address the low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields.
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Original:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited  "outstanding achievements in a lifetime career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" . Rush is one of the few actors to have won the , having won a , and an .
Revised:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited his "outstanding achievements in a lifetime career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" . Rush is one of the few actors to have won the , having won a , and an .
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Original:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited  "outstanding achievements in a lifetime career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" . Rush is one of the few actors to have won the , having won a , and an .
Revised:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited "outstanding achievements in a lifelong career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" . Rush is one of the few actors to have won the , having won a , and an .
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Original:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited  "outstanding achievements in a lifetime career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" . Rush is one of the few actors to have won the , having won a , and an .
Revised:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited "outstanding achievements in a lifetime career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" ; Rush is one of the few actors to have won the , having won a , and an .
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Original:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited  "outstanding achievements in a lifetime career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" . Rush is one of the few actors to have won the , having won a , and an .
Revised:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited "outstanding achievements in a lifetime career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" . Rush is one of only a handful of actors with a claim to the ' , having won a , and an .
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Original:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited  "outstanding achievements in a lifetime career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" . Rush is one of the few actors to have won the , having won a , and an .
Revised:  While presenting the award on the lawn of , Gillard cited "outstanding achievements in a lifetime career on the stage and screen and long term commitment to the Australian arts" . Rush is one of the few actors to have won the , having won , and awards. .
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Original: Marita Cheng, a 22 year old engineering advocate , and student at the , was named as the (16 to 30 years), chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers" . Cheng founded in 2008 to address the low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, was recognized as the Senior Australian of the Year (over 60 years).
Revised: Marita Cheng, a 22 year old engineering advocate — and student at the , was named as the (16 to 30 years), chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers" . Cheng founded in 2008 to address the low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, was recognized as the Senior Australian of the Year (over 60 years).
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Original: Marita Cheng, a 22 year old engineering advocate , and student at the , was named as the (16 to 30 years), chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers" . Cheng founded in 2008 to address the low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, was recognized as the Senior Australian of the Year (over 60 years).
Revised: Marita Cheng, a 22 year old engineering advocate , and student at the , was named ; chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers" . Cheng founded in 2008 to address the low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, was recognized as the Senior Australian of the Year (over 60 years).
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Original: Marita Cheng, a 22 year old engineering advocate , and student at the , was named as the (16 to 30 years), chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers" . Cheng founded in 2008 to address the low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, was recognized as the Senior Australian of the Year (over 60 years).
Revised: Marita Cheng, a 22 year old engineering advocate , and student at the , was named as the (16 to 30 years), chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers" , Cheng founded in 2008 to address the low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, was recognized as the Senior Australian of the Year (over 60 years).
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Original: Marita Cheng, a 22 year old engineering advocate , and student at the , was named as the (16 to 30 years), chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers" . Cheng founded in 2008 to address the low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, was recognized as the Senior Australian of the Year (over 60 years).
Revised: Marita Cheng, a 22 year old engineering advocate , and student at the , was named as the (16 to 30 years), chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers" . Cheng founded in 2008 to address low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, was recognized as the Senior Australian of the Year (over 60 years).
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Original:  She was cited for her "extraordinary commitment to maintaining her culture, the environment of her beloved Crocodile Islands and ensuring younger generations continue to keep their heritage alive . " In the 1960s, although she did not speak English, she initiated the dictionary project, which she continues to support now that it has gone online.
Revised:  She was cited for her "extraordinary commitment to maintaining her culture, the environment of her beloved Crocodile Islands and ensuring younger generations continue to keep their heritage alive " In the 1960s, although she did not speak English, she initiated the dictionary project, which she continues to support now that it has gone online.
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Original:  She was cited for her "extraordinary commitment to maintaining her culture, the environment of her beloved Crocodile Islands and ensuring younger generations continue to keep their heritage alive . " In the 1960s, although she did not speak English, she initiated the dictionary project, which she continues to support now that it has gone online.
Revised:  She was cited for her "extraordinary commitment to maintaining her culture, the environment of her beloved Crocodile Islands and ensuring younger generations continue to keep their heritage alive . " , she initiated the dictionary project, which she continues to support now that it has gone online.
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Original:  She was cited for her "extraordinary commitment to maintaining her culture, the environment of her beloved Crocodile Islands and ensuring younger generations continue to keep their heritage alive . " In the 1960s, although she did not speak English, she initiated the dictionary project, which she continues to support now that it has gone online.
Revised:  She was cited for her "extraordinary commitment to maintaining her culture, the environment of her beloved Crocodile Islands and ensuring younger generations continue to keep their heritage alive . " In the 1960s, although she did not speak English, she initiated the dictionary project, and still continues to support now that it has gone online.
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Original:  She was cited for her "extraordinary commitment to maintaining her culture, the environment of her beloved Crocodile Islands and ensuring younger generations continue to keep their heritage alive . " In the 1960s, although she did not speak English, she initiated the dictionary project, which she continues to support now that it has gone online.
Revised:  She was cited for her "extraordinary commitment to maintaining her culture, the environment of her beloved Crocodile Islands and ensuring younger generations continue to keep their heritage alive . " In the 1960s, although she did not speak English, she initiated the dictionary project, which she continues to support the now-online project;
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Original:  Rush at the in 2011.
Revised:  Rush at the 2011
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Original:  Aged in her nineties, and not knowing English when she launched her project, Baymarrwangga was unable to attend the ceremony.
Revised:  aged in her nineties, and not knowing English when she launched her project, Baymarrwangga was unable to attend the ceremony.
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Original:  She has been a mother for over 200 children , andas the citationelaborates "for 15 years, she has been on call to care for lost, abused and bewildered children in heartbreaking circumstances."
Revised:  A mother to over 200 children , andas the citationelaborates "for 15 years, she has been on call to care for lost, abused and bewildered children in heartbreaking circumstances."
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Original:  She has been a mother for over 200 children , andas the citationelaborates "for 15 years, she has been on call to care for lost, abused and bewildered children in heartbreaking circumstances."
Revised:  She has been a mother for over 200 children and, as laid-out in her citation, "for 15 years, she has been on call to care for lost, abused and bewildered children in heartbreaking circumstances."
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Original:  Over 5000 nominations were received for this year's awards
Revised:  Over 5,000 nominations were received for this year's awards
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Original:  chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers", Cheng founded in 2008 to address low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, was recognized as the Senior Australian of the Year.
Revised:  chosen for her "leadership in the occupational landscape for women by encouraging girls to pursue engineering studies and careers", Cheng founded in 2008 to address low participation by women in technologically-oriented fields. , an elder from the island of Murrungga in East Arnhem Land, Northern Territory, is the new Senior Australian of the Year.
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Original:  Over 5,000 nominations were received for this year's awards
Revised:  Over 5,000 nominations contended for this year's awards
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Original: However; Sam savarino did say that "some people have gotten emotional about this project.
Revised: However; Sam Savarino did say that "some people have gotten emotional about this project.
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Original:  The change are not yet known, but they are expected to be released "tomorrow.
Revised:  The changes are not yet known, but they are expected to be released "tomorrow.
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Original:  The change are not yet known, but they are expected to be released "tomorrow.
Revised:  The change are not yet known, but they are could be released "tomorrow.
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Original: Mrs. Pollina said, "I think people feel passionate about their neighborhood, and this is their neighboorhood .
Revised: Mrs. Pollina said, "I think people feel passionate about their neighborhood, and this is their neighborhood .
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Original:   When you bring a big box on Elmwood Avenue, it takes something away from the urban-streetscape, just as suburban areas do not want a big box Walmart.
Revised:  Thats the whole point of living and shopping on Elmwood," said Termini. "You should be able to go into little shops, that have unique items, and that bring people to Elmwood. When you bring a big box on Elmwood Avenue, it takes something away from the urban-streetscape, just as suburban areas do not want a big box Walmart.
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Original:  280px|Artist's impression of the current proposal, the Elmwood Village Hotel  It is unknown if Savarino Construction or the city of Buffalo will consider Termini's proposal.
Revised:  It is unknown if Savarino Construction or the city of Buffalo will consider Termini's proposal.
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Original:  280px|Artist's impression of the current proposal, the Elmwood Village Hotel  It is unknown if Savarino Construction or the city of Buffalo will consider Termini's proposal.
Revised:  280px|Artist's impression of the current proposal, the Elmwood Village Hotel 280px|Artist's impression of the current proposal, the Elmwood Village Hotel It is unknown if Savarino Construction or the city of Buffalo will consider Termini's proposal.
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Original:  Senior researcher Mu Li, of the University of NSW's school of public health, said "it is reasonable to assume that pregnant women and breastfeeding mothers are also iodine deficient, putting the next generation of children born in this country at risk of the neuropsychological consequences of iodine deficiency. " 200p
Revised:  Senior researcher Mu Li, of the University of NSW's school of public health, said "it is reasonable to assume that pregnant women and breastfeeding mothers are also iodine deficient, putting the next generation of children born in this country at risk of the neuropsychological consequences of iodine deficiency. 200p
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Original: 200px|right Almost half of all Australian primary school children are mild to moderately iodine deficient, putting their mental and physical development at risk, researchers say.
Revised: 200px|right Almost half of all Australian primary school children are mild to moderately iodine deficient, researchers say.
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Original:  A new study documenting  nutritional status in Australian schoolchildren has revealed many are not getting nearly enough iodine , which can lead to mental and growth retardation.
Revised:  A new study documenting nutritional status in Australian schoolchildren has revealed many are not getting enough iodine - which can lead to mental and growth retardation.
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Original:  Tasmania was excluded from the recent Australian study where an voluntary iodine fortification program , using iodised salt in bread, is ongoing.
Revised:  Tasmania was excluded from the study - where an voluntary iodine fortification program , using iodised salt in bread, is ongoing.
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Original:  Tasmania was excluded from the recent Australian study where an voluntary iodine fortification program , using iodised salt in bread, is ongoing.
Revised:  Tasmania was excluded from the recent Australian study where an voluntary iodine fortification program using iodised salt in bread, is ongoing.
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Original:  Professor Cres Eastman is the Director of the National Iodine Nutrition study and the Chairman of the Australian Centre for Control of Iodine Deficiency Disorders .
Revised:  Professor Cres Eastman , Director of the National Iodine Nutrition study and the Chairman of the Australian Centre for Control of Iodine Deficiency Disorders .
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Original:  Professor Cres Eastman is the Director of the National Iodine Nutrition study and the Chairman of the Australian Centre for Control of Iodine Deficiency Disorders .
Revised:  Professor Cres Eastman is the Director of the National Iodine Nutrition study , and Chairman of the Australian Centre for Control of Iodine Deficiency Disorders .
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Original:  "I suspect they won't do that on a voluntary basis, we've tried so far and haven't succeeded, so we've convinced the Food Standards of Australia and New Zealand  that all salt should be iodised," he said.
Revised:  "I suspect they won't do that on a voluntary basis, we've tried so far and haven't succeeded, so we've convinced the Food Standards of Australia and New Zealand | that all salt should be iodised," he said.
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Original:  The findings are co-authored by leading Australian endocrinologist, Professor Cres Eastman, who says authorities are reacting slowly to his urgent calls for mandatory iodised salt.
Revised:  He says authorities are reacting slowly to his urgent calls for mandatory iodised salt.
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Original:  He said told the ABC: "The effects of iodine deficiency are dependent upon how severe it is and when it occurs.
Revised:  "The effects of iodine deficiency are dependent upon how severe it is and when it occurs.
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Original:  so you'll then see consequences being loss of IQ, learning difficulties, hearing difficulties and other neurological problems . "  If you then go to early life, if an infant's not getting enough iodine , then again, brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goitre and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life."
Revised:  so you'll then see consequences being loss of IQ, learning difficulties, hearing difficulties and other neurological problems , " If you then go to early life, if an infant's not getting enough iodine , then again, brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goitre and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life."
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Original:  so you'll then see consequences being loss of IQ, learning difficulties, hearing difficulties and other neurological problems . "  If you then go to early life, if an infant's not getting enough iodine , then again, brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goitre and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life."
Revised:  so you'll then see consequences being loss of IQ, learning difficulties, hearing difficulties and other neurological problems . " he said. " If you then go to early life, if an infant's not getting enough iodine , then again, brain development won't be completed and they won't grow normally, and as you get older the problem will be that you will develop a goitre and your thyroid won't function as well as it should, so that may have all sorts of pernicious effects upon normal function in life."
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