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Original: 142px|Map showing location of earthquake Indonesia's President, Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono, has visited the area worst hit by a tsunami that struck the Indonesian island of Java on Monday afternoon.
Revised: 142px|Map showing location of earthquake Indonesia's President, Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono, has visited the area worst hit by a tsunami that struck the Indonesian island of Java Monday afternoon.
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Original:  Mr Yudhoyono toured the small town of Pangandaran and met people staying in a temporary camp.
Revised:  Mr Yudhoyono toured the small town of Pangandaran meeting people who were staying in a temporary camp.
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Original:  It was produced by an underwater earthquake with a magnitude of 7.7  . At the camp, Mr Yudhoyono told one woman to “be strong” .
Revised:  It was produced by an underwater earthquake with a magnitude of 7.7 . At the camp, Mr Yudhoyono told one woman to "be strong" .
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Original:  She said people are too scared to go home because they live on the coast, a sentiment shared by one women who told AFP: “ I did not lose my home, and my husband and child are safe, but we are still traumatised by the tsunami and are too afraid to return home in case another one comes.
Revised:  She said people are too scared to go home because they live on the coast, a sentiment shared by one woman who told AFP: “ I did not lose my home, and my husband and child are safe, but we are still traumatised by the tsunami and are too afraid to return home in case another one comes.
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Original:  She said people are too scared to go home because they live on the coast, a sentiment shared by one women who told AFP: “ I did not lose my home, and my husband and child are safe, but we are still traumatised by the tsunami and are too afraid to return home in case another one comes.
Revised:  She said people are too scared to go home because they live on the coast, a sentiment shared by one women who told AFP: " I did not lose my home, and my husband and child are safe, but we are still traumatised by the tsunami and are too afraid to return home in case another one comes.
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Original:  ” Aid is being provided by aid workers to the 15,500 people who have been left homeless as a result of the two-meter high wave.
Revised:  " Aid is being provided by aid workers to the 15,500 people who have been left homeless as a result of the two-meter high wave.
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Original:  ” Aid is being provided by aid workers to the 15,500 people who have been left homeless as a result of the two-meter high wave.
Revised:  ” Aid workers are working to provide relief to the 15,500 people who have been left homeless as a result of the two-meter high wave.
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Original:  One woman told Reuters : “ I don’t have anything, only 5,000 rupiah (£0.30, $0.55) in my wallet.
Revised:  One woman told Reuters , " I don’t have anything, only 5,000 rupiah (£0.30, $0.55) in my wallet.
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Original:  ” The Indonesian government has been criticised for failing to inform residents that a tsunami was looming.
Revised:  " The Indonesian government has been criticised for failing to inform residents that a tsunami was looming.
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Original:  After the underwater earthquake erupted , US and Japanese agencies issued warning notices, but the government has admitted it was unable to transmit the bulletins to coastal areas.
Revised:  After the underwater earthquake was detected , US and Japanese agencies issued warning notices, but the government has admitted it was unable to transmit the bulletins to coastal areas.
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Original:  But speaking yesterday, Mr Yudhoyono vowed to hasten efforts to build an early warning system planned after the 2004 Asian tsunami.
Revised:  Speaking yesterday, Mr Yudhoyono vowed to hasten efforts to build an early warning system planned after the 2004 Asian tsunami.
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Original:  “ We want to expedite efforts to get infrastructure for the tsunami warning system in place, ” AP quoted him as saying.
Revised:  " We want to expedite efforts to get infrastructure for the tsunami warning system in place, ” AP quoted him as saying.
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Original:  “ We want to expedite efforts to get infrastructure for the tsunami warning system in place, ” AP quoted him as saying.
Revised:  “ We want to expedite efforts to get infrastructure for the tsunami warning system in place, " AP quoted him as saying.
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Original:  “ I will work with parliament to get the budget ,” he added . Survivors have described the tsunami, which struck a 200km stretch of Java ’ s southern coast.
Revised:  " I will work with parliament to get the budget ,” he added . Survivors have described the tsunami, which struck a 200km stretch of Java ’ s southern coast.
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Original:  “ I will work with parliament to get the budget ,” he added . Survivors have described the tsunami, which struck a 200km stretch of Java ’ s southern coast.
Revised:  “ I will work with parliament to get the budget " . Survivors have described the tsunami, which struck a 200km stretch of Java ’ s southern coast.
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Original:  “ I will work with parliament to get the budget ,” he added . Survivors have described the tsunami, which struck a 200km stretch of Java ’ s southern coast.
Revised:  “ I will work with parliament to get the budget ,” he added . Survivors have described the tsunami, which struck a 200km stretch of Java ' s southern coast.
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Original:  A Belgian tourist said he was in a beachside bar when the wave hit.
Revised:  A Belgian tourist said he was in a beach side bar when the wave hit.
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Original:  “ I saw this big cloud of dark sea water coming up to me ,” he explained .
Revised:  " I saw this big cloud of dark sea water coming up to me ,” he explained .
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Original:  “ I saw this big cloud of dark sea water coming up to me ,” he explained .
Revised:  “ I saw this big cloud of dark sea water coming up to me " .
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Original:  Indonesia is situated on the Pacific Rim of Fire where 90\% of the world ’ s earthquakes and 81\% of the world ’ s largest earthquakes occur. Relate
Revised:  Indonesia is situated on the Pacific Rim of Fire where 90\% of the world ' s earthquakes and 81\% of the world ’ s largest earthquakes occur. Relate
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Original:  Indonesia is situated on the Pacific Rim of Fire where 90\% of the world ’ s earthquakes and 81\% of the world ’ s largest earthquakes occur. Relate
Revised:  Indonesia is situated on the Pacific Rim of Fire where 90\% of the world ’ s earthquakes and 81\% of the world ' s largest earthquakes occur. Relate
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Original:  Indonesia is situated on the Pacific Rim of Fire where 90\% of the world ’ s earthquakes and 81\% of the world ’ s largest earthquakes occur. Relate
Revised:  Indonesia is situated on the Pacific Rim of Fire where 90\% of the world ’ s earthquakes and 81\% of the world ’ s largest earthquakes occur. Related new
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Original: French gouvernment rent a ferry boat from Greece (1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuated french and foreign countries people in need from Lebanon to Chypria.
Revised: French gouvernment rent a ferry boat from Greece (1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuated french and foreign countries people in fifficultied from Lebanon to Chypria.
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Original:  This meeting talked about ways or options to help libanese people.
Revised:  Finaly, this meeting talked about ways or options to help libanese people.
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Original: Yesterday, PM order a second meeting about Libanese crisis with Michèle Alliot-Marie,  Defense Minister.
Revised: Yesterday, the Prime Minister ordered a second meeting about Libanese crisis with Michèle Alliot-Marie, Defense Minister.
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Original: Yesterday, PM order a second meeting about Libanese crisis with Michèle Alliot-Marie,  Defense Minister.
Revised: Yesterday, PM order a second meeting about Lebanese crisis with Michèle Alliot-Marie, Defense Minister.
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Original:  French gouvernment rent a ferry boat from Greece (1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuated french and foreign countries people in fifficultied from Lebanon to Chypria.
Revised:  The French government also rented a ferry boat from Greece (1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuated french and foreign countries people in fifficultied from Lebanon to Chypria.
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Original:  French gouvernment rent a ferry boat from Greece (1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuated french and foreign countries people in fifficultied from Lebanon to Chypria.
Revised:  French gouvernment rent a ferry boat from Greece (1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuate French and foreign countries people in fifficultied from Lebanon to Chypria.
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Original:  French militay forces are beginning to approach Chypria if needed with military hospital . Since 13 of july Foreign Affairs is asking to french people to signal themselves to authorities and if possible to postpone any visit to Lebanon.
Revised:  French military forces are beginning to approach Chypria if needed with military hospital . Since 13 of july Foreign Affairs is asking to french people to signal themselves to authorities and if possible to postpone any visit to Lebanon.
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Original:  French militay forces are beginning to approach Chypria if needed with military hospital . Since 13 of july Foreign Affairs is asking to french people to signal themselves to authorities and if possible to postpone any visit to Lebanon.
Revised:  French militay forces are beginning to approach Chypria with medical aid . Since 13 of july Foreign Affairs is asking to french people to signal themselves to authorities and if possible to postpone any visit to Lebanon.
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Original:  French militay forces are beginning to approach Chypria if needed with military hospital . Since 13 of july Foreign Affairs is asking to french people to signal themselves to authorities and if possible to postpone any visit to Lebanon.
Revised:  French militay forces are beginning to approach Chypria if needed with military hospital . On July 13 of july Foreign Affairs is asking to french people to signal themselves to authorities and if possible to postpone any visit to Lebanon.
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Original:  French militay forces are beginning to approach Chypria if needed with military hospital . Since 13 of july Foreign Affairs is asking to french people to signal themselves to authorities and if possible to postpone any visit to Lebanon.
Revised:  French militay forces are beginning to approach Chypria if needed with military hospital . Since 13 , the French Foreign Affairs department began asking French people to identify themselves to authorities and if possible to postpone any visit to Lebanon.
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Original:  Finaly , this meeting talked about ways or options to help libanese people.
Revised:  Finally , this meeting talked about ways or options to help libanese people.
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Original:  Finaly , this meeting talked about ways or options to help libanese people.
Revised:  Finaly , this meeting talked about ways to help the Lebanese people.
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Original:  Fouad Siniora, libanese PM , talked to French PM on phone the 15 juillet and expressed his bad feeling about situation into his country
Revised:  Fouad Siniora, the Lebanese Prime Minister , talked to French PM on phone the 15 juillet and expressed his bad feeling about situation into his country
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Original:  Fouad Siniora, libanese PM , talked to French PM on phone the 15 juillet and expressed his bad feeling about situation into his country
Revised:  Fouad Siniora, libanese PM , talked to French PM on phone the 15 and expressed his bad feeling about situation into his country
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Original:  Fouad Siniora, libanese PM , talked to French PM on phone the 15 juillet and expressed his bad feeling about situation into his country
Revised:  Fouad Siniora, libanese PM , talked to French PM on phone the 15 juillet and expressed his bad feelings about the situation in his country
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Original: French Prime Minister, Dominique de Villepin will visit Beirut today.
Revised: French Prime Minister, Dominique de Villepin is in Beirut today.
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Original:  The French government also rented a ferry boat from Greece ( 1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuate French and other foreign nationals from Lebanon to Chypria .
Revised:  The French government also rented a 1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuate French and other foreign nationals from Lebanon to Chypria .
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Original:  The French government also rented a ferry boat from Greece ( 1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuate French and other foreign nationals from Lebanon to Chypria .
Revised:  The French government also rented a ferry boat from Greece ( 1000 seats) in order to begin to evacuate French and other foreign nationals from Lebanon to Cyprus .
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Original:  Fouad Siniora, the Lebanese Prime Minister, talked to the French Prime Minister on the phone on July 15 and expressed his bad feelings about the situation in his country
Revised:  Fouad Siniora, the Lebanese Prime Minister, talked to the French Prime Minister on the phone on July 15 and expressed his feelings about the situation in his country
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Original:  Former Lebanese Prime Minister Rafik Hariri was travelling in a bullet-proof car in a motorcade when the explosion occured around 1pm local time  .
Revised:  Former Lebanese Prime Minister Rafik Hariri was travelling in a car in a motorcade when the explosion occured around 1pm local time .
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Original:  Anonymous sources have said car containing 300 kg of  TNT was used;
Revised:  Anonymous sources have said car containing 300 kg of w: TNT was used;
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Original:  The explosion created a crater at least 10 m across and devestated the frontages of nearby shops and hotels .
Revised:  The explosion created a crater at least 10 m across and devestated the fronts of nearby shops and hotels .
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Original:  There has been no confirmation that this is true .
Revised:  There has been no confirmation that this group actually carried out the attack .
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Original:  The  BBC quotes the group has saying "We hold the Lebanese authority and the Syrian authority, being the authority of tutelage in Lebanon, responsible for this crime and other similar crimes."
Revised:  The w: BBC quotes the group has saying "We hold the Lebanese authority and the Syrian authority, being the authority of tutelage in Lebanon, responsible for this crime and other similar crimes."
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Original:  The  BBC quotes the group has saying "We hold the Lebanese authority and the Syrian authority, being the authority of tutelage in Lebanon, responsible for this crime and other similar crimes."
Revised:  The BBC quotes the group has having said "We hold the Lebanese authority and the Syrian authority, being the authority of tutelage in Lebanon, responsible for this crime and other similar crimes."
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Original: A large blast on the seafront of west Beirut  has killed several people, including former prime minister Rafik Hariri.
Revised: A large blast on the seafront of west Beirut has killed several people, including former Prime Minister Rafik Hariri.
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Original:  Former Lebanese Prime Minister Rafik Hariri was travelling in a car in a motorcade when the explosion occured around 1pm local time.
Revised:  Hariri was travelling in a car in a motorcade when the explosion occured around 1pm local time.
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Original:  Former Lebanese Prime Minister Rafik Hariri was travelling in a car in a motorcade when the explosion occured around 1pm local time.
Revised:  Former Lebanese Prime Minister Rafik Hariri was travelling in a car in a motorcade when the explosion occurred around 1pm local time.
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Original:  The explosion created a crater at least 10 m across and devestated the fronts of nearby shops and hotels, destroying several buildings entirely.
Revised:  The explosion created a crater at least 10 m across and devastated the fronts of nearby shops and hotels, destroying several buildings entirely.
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Original:  Hariri's supporters see Syria as being responsable for the attack.
Revised:  Hariri's supporters see Syria as being responsible for the attack.
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Original:  Lately, Hariri had become a chief opponent of the Syrian millitary presence (14,000 troops) in Lebanon.
Revised:  Lately, Hariri had become a chief opponent of the Syrian military presence (14,000 troops) in Lebanon.
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Original:  Tony Blair suggested that he was keen to travel to the Middle-East personally in discussions with  George W Bush, but George Bush suggested that Condoleeza Rice should travel there instead.
Revised:  Tony Blair suggested that he was keen to travel to the Middle-East personally in discussions with w: George W Bush, but George Bush suggested that Condoleeza Rice should travel there instead.
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Original:  Tony Blair suggested that he was keen to travel to the Middle-East personally in discussions with w: George W Bush, but George Bush suggested that Condoleeza Rice should travel there instead.
Revised:  Tony Blair suggested that he was keen to travel to the Middle-East personally in discussions with George W Bush, but George Bush suggested that Condoleeza Rice should travel there instead.
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Original: US President George W  Bush said on Sunday that Hezbollah and its links with Iran and Syria is a root cause of instability in the Middle East.
Revised: United States President George W Bush said on Sunday that Hezbollah and its links with Iran and Syria is a root cause of instability in the Middle East.
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Original: US President George W  Bush said on Sunday that Hezbollah and its links with Iran and Syria is a root cause of instability in the Middle East.
Revised: US President George W . Bush said on Sunday that Hezbollah and its links with Iran and Syria is a root cause of instability in the Middle East.
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Original:  UK Prime Minister Tony Blair said that extremists backed by Syria and Iran wanted to interrupt the [peace] process.
Revised:  United Kingdom Prime Minister Tony Blair said that extremists backed by Syria and Iran wanted to interrupt the [peace] process.
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Original:  Tony Blair suggested that he was keen to travel to the Middle-East personally in discussions with George W  Bush, but George Bush suggested that Condoleeza Rice should travel there instead.
Revised:  Tony Blair suggested that he was keen to travel to the Middle-East personally in discussions with George W . Bush, but George Bush suggested that Condoleeza Rice should travel there instead.
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Original:  Tony Blair suggested that he was keen to travel to the Middle-East personally in discussions with George W. Bush, but George Bush suggested that Condoleeza Rice should travel there instead.
Revised:  Tony Blair suggested that he was keen to travel to the Middle-East personally in discussions with George W. Bush, but George Bush suggested that Condoleezza Rice should travel there instead.
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Original: The Israeli airforce said it destroyed a truck sitting near the Israel-Lebanon border capable of firing long-range Iranian missiles.
Revised: The Israeli airforce said it destroyed a truck sitting near the Israel-Lebanon border capable of firing long-range missiles.
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Original: One month has passed since Amnesty International called for the establishment of an international investigation to examine the circumstances in which scores of Palestinians had been killed by Israeli forces in the Gaza Strip in recent months.
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Original: The gunmen proceeded to run amock through the market with automatic weapons and rocket propelled grenades.
Revised: The gunmen proceeded to kill shoppers and passers-by with automatic weapons and rocket propelled grenades.
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Original:  On hearing the news Shiite cleric Muqtada al-Sadr removed himself from a session in Parliament along with a similar protest  by another party.
Revised:  On hearing the news Shiite cleric Muqtada al-Sadr removed himself from a session in Parliament along with a similar protest made by another party.
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Original:  Two car bombs also were detonated leading to further casualties .
Revised:  Two car bombs also were detonated leading to further casualties 
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Original:  Women and childrenwere among the casaulties .
Revised:  , which included women and children .
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Original:  The gunmen proceeded to kill shoppers and passers-by with automatic weapons and rocket propelled grenades.
Revised:  The gunmen proceeded to attack shoppers and passers-by with automatic weapons and rocket propelled grenades.
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Original:  Two car bombs also were detonated leading to further casualties , which included women and children . Local town official Sheik Bassem Anizi said he was an eyewitness to the events as they unfolded.
Revised:  Two car bombs also were detonated leading to further casualties . Local town official Sheik Bassem Anizi said he was an eyewitness to the events as they unfolded.
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Original:  Regarding the motive of the attack: " The terrorists wanted to send a message saying we can attack anywhere we want and kill civilians," he said  .
Revised:  . The terrorists wanted to send a message saying we can attack anywhere we want and kill civilians," he said .
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Original: He started as a writer for like many science fiction and fantasy writers in this period and he eventually compiled those stories in his first book  (1947)  .
Revised: He started as a writer for like many science fiction and fantasy writers in this period , and eventually compiled his first book (1947) .
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Original: He started as a writer for like many science fiction and fantasy writers in this period and he eventually compiled those stories in his first book  (1947)  .
Revised: He started as a writer for like many science fiction and fantasy writers in this period and he eventually compiled those stories in his first book : (1947) .
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Original:  Later an asteroid, known as , was named after him.
Revised:  An asteroid, known as , was named after him.
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Original:  Gaidamachuk attacked her victims in the town of , pretending she was a social worker so they let her into their flats.
Revised:  Gaidamachuk attacked her victims in the region pretending she was a social worker so they let her into their flats.
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Original:  The court ordered her to pay the cost of her prosecution.
Revised:  She must pay expenses for her prosecution.
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Original:  Irina has two children  
Revised:  Irina has two children . 
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Original: More then 3,000 people were questioned before Gaidamachuk was caught.
Revised: More than 3,000 people were questioned before Gaidamachuk was caught.
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Original: In the lastest Newspoll to be released by "The Australian" newspaper Australian Prime Minister w: John Howard has been given overwhelming support by the Australian populace in his leadership stoush with Deputy PM Peter Costello.
Revised: In the lastest Newspoll to be released by "The Australian" newspaper Australian Prime Minister John Howard has been given overwhelming support by the Australian populace in his leadership stoush with Deputy PM Peter Costello.
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Original:  Mr Howard leads the opposition leader Kim Beazley 53\% to 27\%- down from 56\% to 25\% in April.
Revised:  Mr Howard leads the opposition leader Kin Beazley 53\% to 27\%- down from 56\% to 25\% in April.
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