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Original:  The Clerk of the Municipality of Punta Arenas , Orlando Estefó, congratulated the students, "by making history every day by day, as the main actors in the educational process.
Revised:  The Clerk of the Municipality of , Orlando Estefó, congratulated the students, "by making history every day by day, as the main actors in the educational process.
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Original:  as the crowd fled, two suicide bombers blew up vests with explosives   Hussein Nashad was a witness to the incident.
Revised:  as the crowd fled, two suicide bombers blew up vests with explosives . Hussein Nashad was a witness to the incident.
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Original:  This attack comes four days after multiple attacks throughout Iraq, attributed to al-Qaeda, killed 100 ten people in the deadliest violence of the year  
Revised:  This attack comes four days after multiple attacks throughout Iraq, attributed to al-Qaeda, killed 100 ten people in the deadliest violence of the year . 
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Original:  The weather was cooperative with today's launchplans, and Atlantis appeared to have taken off without incident .
Revised:  The launch, which appeared to have taken off without incident .
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Original:  Atlantis lifted off  at 2:20 p.m. EDT from the Kennedy Space Center in Cape Canaveral, Florida in fair weather, carrying six veteran astronauts and an assortment of parts for the International Space Station (ISS)  . This mission, scheduled to take twelve days, is the aging shuttle's 32nd voyage into space.
Revised:  Atlantis lifted off in fair weather at 2:20 p.m. EDT from the Kennedy Space Center in Cape Canaveral, Florida in fair weather, carrying six veteran astronauts and an assortment of parts for the International Space Station (ISS) . This mission, scheduled to take twelve days, is the aging shuttle's 32nd voyage into space.
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Original:  Atlantis lifted off  at 2:20 p.m. EDT from the Kennedy Space Center in Cape Canaveral, Florida in fair weather, carrying six veteran astronauts and an assortment of parts for the International Space Station (ISS)  . This mission, scheduled to take twelve days, is the aging shuttle's 32nd voyage into space.
Revised:  Atlantis lifted off at 2:20 p.m. EDT from the Kennedy Space Center in Cape Canaveral, Florida . Carrying six veteran astronauts and an assortment of parts for the International Space Station (ISS) . This mission, scheduled to take twelve days, is the aging shuttle's 32nd voyage into space.
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Original:  The launch , which appeared to have proceeded without incident, was viewed by over 40,000 spectators at Kennedy  .
Revised:  The launch was viewed by over 40,000 spectators at Kennedy .
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Original:  However, it will still be used as an emergency rescue shuttle for the final Space Shuttle mission, to take place later this year or early next year.
Revised:  However, Atlantis will still be used as an emergency rescue shuttle for the final Space Shuttle mission, to take place later this year or early next year.
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Original:  However, it will still be used as an emergency rescue shuttle for the final Space Shuttle mission, to take place later this year or early next year.
Revised:  However, it will still be maintained as an emergency rescue shuttle for the final Space Shuttle mission, to take place later this year or early next year.
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Original:  NASA may also use Atlantis to resupply the ISS, but has not yet made a final decision regarding such plans
Revised:  NASA may also use Atlantis to resupply the ISS, it has not yet made a final decision regarding such plans
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Original:  NASA may also use Atlantis to resupply the ISS, but has not yet made a final decision regarding such plans
Revised:  NASA may also use Atlantis to resupply the ISS, but has not yet made a final decision regarding the plan
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Original:  The launch was viewed by over 40,000 spectators at Kennedy, and while  no damage to the shuttle was seen, a piece of space junk near the ISS caused minor concern (but no delays).
Revised:  The launch was viewed by over 40,000 spectators at Kennedy, and while While no damage to the shuttle was seen, a piece of space junk near the ISS caused minor concern (but no delays).
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Original: File:STS-132 launching  .jpg|The Space Shuttle Atlantis blasted off earlier today for its final mission.
Revised: File:STS-132 launching cropped .jpg|The Space Shuttle Atlantis blasted off earlier today for its final mission.
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Original: Atlantis lifted off in fair weather at 2:20 p.m. EDT ( 18:20 UTC) from the Kennedy Space Center in Cape Canaveral, Florida.
Revised: Atlantis lifted off in fair weather at 2:20 p.m. EDT ( 1820 UTC) from the Kennedy Space Center in Cape Canaveral, Florida.
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Original: The recount was called for by Nouri al-Maliki, the current prime minister, after his party came second.
Revised: The recount was requested by Nouri al-Maliki, the current prime minister, after his party came second.
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Original:  Since the recount was done manually, it took eleven days to go through the 2.5 million votes cast in the Baghdad area.
Revised:  Since the recount was done manually, it took 11 days to go through the 2.5 million votes cast in the Baghdad area.
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Original:  It was later learned that MLB officials had evidence of his drug use prior to Palmeiro’s testimony, but the evidence was not exposed until after they suspended him on August 1.
Revised:  It was later learned that MLB officials had evidence of his drug use prior to the Palmeiro testimony, but the evidence was not exposed until after they suspended him on August 1.
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Original:  It was later learned that MLB officials had evidence of his drug use prior to Palmeiro’s testimony, but the evidence was not exposed until after they suspended him on August 1.
Revised:  It was later learned that MLB officials had evidence of his drug use prior to Palmeiro’s testimony, but the evidence was not exposed until a scandalous aftermath was caused by the August 1 suspension.
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Original:  In a brief meeting with ballpark press reporters before the game, Palmeiro said "It's been a tough time for me and my family over the last couple of weeks, and at this time, I've been instructed by my attorneys not to comment on the situation.
Revised:  In a short meeting with ballpark press reporters before the game, Palmeiro said "It's been a tough time for me and my family over the last couple of weeks, and at this time, I've been instructed by my attorneys not to comment on the situation.
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Original:  A local sportswriter David Steele called for fans to stay home and hit the sport in its money pockets.
Revised:  A local sportswriter David Steele called on fans to stay home and hit the sport in its money pockets.
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Original: Palmeiro, this season's embattled designated hitter and sometimes first baseman, is an Orioles star who  made finger wagging and emphatic denials of steroid use during his testimony before the House Committee on Government Reform in March this year .
Revised: Palmeiro, this season's embattled designated hitter and sometimes first baseman, is an Orioles star who made finger wagging and emphatic denials of steroid use during his testimony before the House Committee on Government Reform .
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Original:  It was later learned that MLB officials had evidence of his drug use prior to the Palmeiro testimony, but the evidence was not exposed until a scandalous aftermath was caused by the August 1 suspension.
Revised:  It was later learned that MLB officials had evidence of his drug use prior to the Palmeiro testimony, but none of that was known until the scandalous aftermath caused by the August 1 suspension.
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Original:  Attendance was a little on the thin side in the 48,262 capacity stadium at Camden Yards.
Revised:  Attendance was on the thin side in the 48,262 capacity stadium at Camden Yards.
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Original:  It was later learned that MLB officials had evidence of his drug use prior to the Palmeiro testimony, but none of that was known until the scandalous aftermath caused by their August 1 suspension   .
Revised:  It was later learned that MLB officials had evidence of his drug use prior to the Palmeiro testimony, but none of that was known until the scandalous aftermath caused by their August 1 suspension of him. .
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Original: Baltimore Orioles baseball fans had a chance to vote for their support of Major League Baseball ’ s (MLB) steroid use and policies with their home game attendance Thursday night.
Revised: Baltimore Orioles baseball fans had a chance to vote for their support of Major League Baseball ' s (MLB) steroid use and policies with their home game attendance Thursday night.
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Original:  The prospects currently look dim for a Palmeiro nomination to baseball ’ s Hall of Fame.
Revised:  The prospects currently look dim for a Palmeiro nomination to baseball ' s Hall of Fame.
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Original: Photo of Schwarzenegger in 2008.
Revised: Arnold Schwarzenegger in 2008.
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Original:  Schwarzenegger claims the Californian economy faces growth and budget problems like eurozone countries including Greece and Ireland.
Revised:  Schwarzenegger claims the Californian economy faces growth and budget problems like eurozone countries such as Greece and Ireland.
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Original:  Schwarzenegger told in a Sacramento press conference that California must cut spending to US $12.4 billion.
Revised:  Schwarzenegger said in a Sacramento press conference that California must cut spending to US $12.4 billion.
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Original:  The governor all proposed freezing funds to local public schools and cutting state workers' incomes.
Revised:  The governor also proposed freezing funds to local public schools and cutting state workers' incomes.
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Original:  California State Senate president Darrell Steinberg, a Democrat, said, "The cuts are absolutely unacceptable," and the governor should foucs on delaying business tax cuts
Revised:  California State Senate president Darrell Steinberg, a Democrat, said, "The cuts are absolutely unacceptable," and the governor should focus on delaying business tax cuts
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Original: Once more, Pichilemu was selected to perform this meeting.
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Original: The VI Congress of Mayors and Councilors of the O'Higgins Region, as part of the program of annual activities of the Chilean Association of Municipalities, is taking place in Pichilemu, Chile since last Thursday 13 and is going to end on Saturday 15.
Revised: The VI Congress of Mayors and Councilors of the O'Higgins Region, as part of the program of annual activities of the Chilean Association of Municipalities, is taking place in Pichilemu, Chile . It began last Thursday and will end today.
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Original:   The congress is treating the most important topic, that is the regional reconstruction, and how to take well the defiances they have to face in education, homes and health , in each municipality.
Revised:  The congress is discussing the main topic, regional reconstruction, and how to take well the defiances they have to face in education, homes and health , in each municipality.
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Original:   The congress is treating the most important topic, that is the regional reconstruction, and how to take well the defiances they have to face in education, homes and health , in each municipality.
Revised:  The congress is treating the most important topic, that is the regional reconstruction, as well as how to manage setbacks in education, homes and health , in each municipality.
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Original:   The congress is treating the most important topic, that is the regional reconstruction, and how to take well the defiances they have to face in education, homes and health , in each municipality.
Revised:  The congress is treating the most important topic, that is the regional reconstruction, and how to take well the defiances they have to face in education, homes and health for each municipality.
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Original:  The event was assisted by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegacy , that distinguished the work of the mayors in the region;
Revised:  The event was assisted by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegac , that distinguished the work of the mayors in the region;
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Original:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies of the region, and the Interior Minister , Rodrigo Hinzpeter,  invited to become acquainted to the needs of the region
Revised:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies of the region, as well as Interior Minister Rodrigo Hinzpeter, invited to become acquainted to the needs of the region
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Original:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies of the region, and the Interior Minister , Rodrigo Hinzpeter,  invited to become acquainted to the needs of the region
Revised:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies of the region, and the Interior Minister , Rodrigo Hinzpeter, were invited to become acquainted to the needs of the region
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Original: Pichilemu was once again selected to perform this meeting.
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Original: The event was assisted by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegac , that distinguished the work of the mayors in the region;
Revised: The event was assisted by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegacy , that distinguished the work of the mayors in the region;
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Original: The event was assisted by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegacy, that distinguished the work of the mayors in the region ;
Revised: The event was attended by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegacy, that distinguished the work of the mayors in the region ;
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Original: The event was assisted by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegacy, that distinguished the work of the mayors in the region ;
Revised: The event was assisted by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegation that viewed the work of the mayors in the region ;
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Original: The event was assisted by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegacy, that distinguished the work of the mayors in the region ;
Revised: The event was assisted by almost 300 regional authorities and a Brazilian delegacy, that distinguished the work of the mayors in the region ,
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Original:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies of the region, as well as Interior Minister Rodrigo Hinzpeter, were invited to become acquainted to the needs of the region
Revised:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies . Chilean Interior Minister Rodrigo Hinzpeter, were invited to become acquainted to the needs of the region
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Original:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies of the region, as well as Interior Minister Rodrigo Hinzpeter, were invited to become acquainted to the needs of the region
Revised:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies of the region, as well as Interior Minister Rodrigo Hinzpeter, was also invited to become acquainted to the needs of the region
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Original:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies of the region, as well as Interior Minister Rodrigo Hinzpeter, were invited to become acquainted to the needs of the region
Revised:  in addition to the Regional Counselors, Senators and Deputies of the region, as well as Interior Minister Rodrigo Hinzpeter, were invited to become acquainted with the needs of the region
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Original:  Chilean Interior Minister Rodrigo Hinzpeter, was also invited to become acquainted with the needs of the region
Revised:  Chilean Interior Minister was also invited to become acquainted with the needs of the region
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Original:  A prominent Spanish judge, Baltasar Garzon , has been suspended from his post by Spain's General Council of the Judiciary.
Revised:  A prominent Spanish judge, Baltasar Garzón , has been suspended from his post by Spain's General Council of the Judiciary.
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Original:  150px|Spanish judge Baltasar Garzon The suspension comes after Spain's Supreme Court ruled that an inquiry Garzon opened in 2008 into crimes committed during Spain's civil war, which lasted from 1936 to 1939.
Revised:  The suspension comes after Spain's Supreme Court ruled that an inquiry Garzon opened in 2008 into crimes committed during Spain's civil war, which lasted from 1936 to 1939.
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Original:  The events are covered by an amnesty from 1977, and it is charged that Garzon abused his powers by opening the investigation.
Revised:  The events are covered by an amnesty from 1977, and it is charged that Garzón abused his powers by opening the investigation.
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Original:  Garzon appealed the ruling, claiming that had conducted a legitimate inquiry, as crimes against humanity had been conducted during the war, which were not valid under the amnesty.
Revised:  Garzón appealed the ruling, claiming that had conducted a legitimate inquiry, as crimes against humanity had been conducted during the war, which were not valid under the amnesty.
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Original:  if convicted, Garzon would not serve jail time, but would be suspended for as long as 20 years.
Revised:  if convicted, Garzón would not serve jail time, but would be suspended for as long as 20 years.
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Original:  The Human Rights Watch was critical of Garzon 's suspension;
Revised:  The Human Rights Watch was critical of Garzón 's suspension;
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Original:  Garzon was instrumental in delivering justice for victims of atrocities abroad and now he is being punished for trying to do the same at home."
Revised:  Garzón was instrumental in delivering justice for victims of atrocities abroad and now he is being punished for trying to do the same at home."
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Original:  On Thursday, Garzon requested of the Spanish government to be allowed to serve as a consultant for the International Criminal Court, which offered him the post.
Revised:  On Thursday, Garzón requested of the Spanish government to be allowed to serve as a consultant for the International Criminal Court, which offered him the post.
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Original:  Scheduled to last for seven months, the assignment has been seen as Garzon 's attempt to at least partially avoid the embarrassment of being suspended from his post in Spain
Revised:  Scheduled to last for seven months, the assignment has been seen as Garzón 's attempt to at least partially avoid the embarrassment of being suspended from his post in Spain
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Original:  He also warns that this event was not considered by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change  
Revised:  He also warns that this event was not considered by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change . 
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Original:  Methane is a greenhouse gas 22 times as powerful than carbon dioxide.
Revised:  Methane is a greenhouse gas 22 times more powerful than carbon dioxide.
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Original: David Viner, of the University of East Anglia told the Guardiannewspaper : "When you start messing around with these natural systems, you can end up in situations where it's unstoppable".
Revised: David Viner, of the University of East Anglia told The Guardian : "When you start messing around with these natural systems, you can end up in situations where it's unstoppable".
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Original:   University of Alaska scientists found methane "hotspots" in eastern Siberia where the gas bubbles out from thawing permafrost bogs at a rate that prevents the surface from freezing.
Revised:  University of Alaska found methane "hotspots" in eastern Siberia where the gas bubbles out from thawing permafrost bogs at a rate that prevents the surface from freezing.
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Original:  The permafrost had been intact for 11,000 years and started melting  4 years ago .
Revised:  The permafrost has been intact for 11,000 years and started melting 4 years ago .
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Original:  The permafrost had been intact for 11,000 years and started melting  4 years ago .
Revised:  The permafrost had been intact for 11,000 years and started melting 4 years ago 
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Original: Leongatha trailed by ten points at quarter time with Traralgon keading four goals and four behinds, twenty eight (4-4 (28)) to two goals and six behinds, eighteen (2-6 (18)).
Revised: Leongatha trailed by ten points at quarter time with Traralgon leading four goals and four behinds, twenty eight (4-4 (28)) to two goals and six behinds, eighteen (2-6 (18)).
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Original: A Ryanair airplane .
Revised: A Ryanair aircraft .
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Original:  The five legislators quitted the Legislative Council earlier this year in protest of the government's indifference towards the universal suffrage and  abolishment of functional constituencies.
Revised:  The five legislators quitted the Legislative Council earlier this year in protest of the government's indifference towards universal suffrage and abolishment of functional constituencies.
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Original:  The five legislators quitted the Legislative Council earlier this year in protest of the government's indifference towards the universal suffrage and  abolishment of functional constituencies.
Revised:  The five legislators quitted the Legislative Council earlier this year in protest of the government's indifference towards the universal suffrage and the abolishment of functional constituencies.
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Original:  The elections started 7:30 in the morning today, and is due to end at ten o'clock tonight.
Revised:  The elections started 7:30 in the morning today, and are due to end at ten o'clock tonight.
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Original:  Financial Secretary John Tsang, who was in Shanghai, stated that ' Donald Tsang will expound on his opinions '. Leung Chun Ying and Anthony Cheung also refused to vote.
Revised:  Financial Secretary John Tsang, who was in Shanghai, stated that " Donald Tsang will expound on his opinions '. Leung Chun Ying and Anthony Cheung also refused to vote.
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Original:  Financial Secretary John Tsang, who was in Shanghai, stated that ' Donald Tsang will expound on his opinions '. Leung Chun Ying and Anthony Cheung also refused to vote.
Revised:  Financial Secretary John Tsang, who was in Shanghai, stated that ' Donald Tsang will expound on his opinions ". Prominent politicians Leung Chun Ying and Anthony Cheung also refused to vote.
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Original:  The  DAB and Liberal Party also refused to vote, the former going on a trip to avoid voting.
Revised:  The heads of the DAB and Liberal Party also refused to vote, the former going on a trip to avoid voting.
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Original:  The highest is Kowloon West, with 14.9\%  while New Territories West was the lowest, at 9.93\%.
Revised:  The highest is Kowloon West, with 14.9\% , while New Territories West was the lowest, at 9.93\%.
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Original: Hong Kong's by-elections, triggered by the quitting of five legislators, Wong Yuk-man, Tanya Chan, Leung Kwok-hung, Albert Chan and Alan Leong, will take place today.
Revised: Hong Kong's by-elections, triggered by the resignation of five legislators, Wong Yuk-man, Tanya Chan, Leung Kwok-hung, Albert Chan and Alan Leong, will take place today.
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Original:  The heads of the DAB and Liberal Party also refused to vote , the former going on a trip to avoid voting.
Revised:  The heads of the DAB and Liberal Party didn't cast their ballots either , the former going on a trip to avoid voting.
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