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Original:  After wiping out the least desirable shanties, next in line for demolition are the illegal ‘well-off’ shanties and neighborhoods, according to the legal and beaurocratic motions that have been executed toward cleaning up Mumbai's appearance by lowering the dominance of shanties, which make up 62 percent of Mumbai's housing.
Revised:  After wiping out the least desirable shanties, next in line for demolition are the illegal ‘well-off’ shanties and neighborhoods, according to the legal and bureaucratic motions that have been executed toward cleaning up Mumbai's appearance by lowering the dominance of shanties, which make up 62 percent of Mumbai's housing.
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Original:  The Xbox game console was marketed by Microsoft as a loss leader , similar to Sony's PlayStation 2, with the plan of establishing a profit base derived from game sales and licensing to third party game publishers  
Revised:  The Xbox game console was marketed by Microsoft as a loss leader with the plan of establishing a profit base derived from game sales and licensing to third party game publishers 
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Original:  The Xbox game console was marketed by Microsoft as a loss leader , similar to Sony's PlayStation 2, with the plan of establishing a profit base derived from game sales and licensing to third party game publishers  
Revised:  The Xbox game console was marketed by Microsoft as a loss leader , similar to Sony's PlayStation 2, with the plan of establishing a profit base derived from game sales and licensing to third party game publishers . 
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Original:  They all voted with Delay for the new bankruptcy law and against relief for victims of national disasters on a party line vote.
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Original: Tom DeLay U.S House of Representatives majority leader Tom DeLay was indicted today in Austin, Texas by a Travis County grand jury on conspiracy charges.
Revised: Tom DeLay U.S House of Representatives majority leader Tom DeLay was today indicted in Austin, Texas by a Travis County grand jury on conspiracy charges.
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Original:  Travis County contains the state capital of Austin and may be considered a liberal county within a conservative state, as indicated by  recent presidential elections.
Revised:  Travis County contains the state capital of Austin and may be considered a liberal county within a conservative state, as indicated by the most recent presidential elections.
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Original:  Travis County contains the state capital of Austin and is w:Politics_of_Texas politically known as a liberal county within a conservative state, as indicated by the most recent presidential elections.
Revised:  Travis County contains the state capital of Austin and is politically known as a liberal county within a conservative state, as indicated by the most recent presidential elections.
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Original:  Travis County  contains the state capital of Austin and is politically known as a liberal county within a conservative state, as indicated by the most recent presidential elections.
Revised:  Travis County , located in central Texas, contains the state capital of Austin and is politically known as a liberal county within a conservative state, as indicated by the most recent presidential elections.
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Original: Tom DeLay U.S. House of Representatives majority leader was today in , Texas by a Travis County on conspiracy charges.
Revised:  U.S. House of Representatives majority leader was today in , Texas by a Travis County on conspiracy charges.
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Original: North Korea has warned of "self-defensive blows" to South Korea if they participate in joint  live-fire military exercises with the United States, scheduled to begin in the next few days.
Revised: North Korea has warned of "self-defensive blows" to South Korea if they participate in joint , live-fire military exercises with the United States, scheduled to begin in the next few days.
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Original:  The nation's official communist website Uriminzokkiri, warns that "if war breaks out, it will lead to nuclear warfare and not be limited to the Korean Peninsula."
Revised:  The nation's official website Uriminzokkiri, warns that "if war breaks out, it will lead to nuclear warfare and not be limited to the Korean Peninsula."
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Original:  Deputy leader of the opposition (Liberal Party), Julie Bishop, said there was no room for Ms Gillard to "weasel out of it  " and that the prime minister's legal background did not warrant her comments.
Revised:  Deputy leader of the opposition (Liberal Party), Julie Bishop, said there was no room for Ms Gillard to "weasel out of it . " and that the prime minister's legal background did not warrant her comments.
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Original:  Deputy leader of the opposition (Liberal Party), Julie Bishop, said there was no room for Ms Gillard to "weasel out of it  " and that the prime minister's legal background did not warrant her comments.
Revised:  Deputy leader of the opposition (Liberal Party), Julie Bishop, said there was no room for Ms Gillard to "weasel out of it " "She is a lawyer. She well knows about the presumption of innocence, said Bishop. She added that the prime minister's legal background did not warrant her comments.
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Original:  Calls have also been voiced by the Green's Senator, Scott Ludlam, for Ms Gillard to retract her comments   
Revised:  Calls have also been voiced by the Green's Senator, Scott Ludlam, for Ms Gillard to retract her comments . 
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Original: Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard The Australian Federal Police (AFP) has stated that the whistle-blowing website known as WikiLeaks , has committed no crimes in Australia by publishing over 250,000 United States diplomatic cables.
Revised: Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard The Australian Federal Police (AFP) has stated that the whistle-blowing website known as Wikileaks , has committed no crimes in Australia by publishing over 250,000 United States diplomatic cables.
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Original:  McClelland stated that the Government's reaction to the WikiLeaks issue was "prudent."
Revised:  McClelland stated that the Government's reaction to the Wikileaks issue was "prudent."
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Original: Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard The Australian Federal Police (AFP) has stated that the whistle-blowing website known as Wikileaks , has committed no crimes in Australia by publishing over 250,000 United States diplomatic cables.
Revised: Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard The Australian Federal Police (AFP) has stated that the whistle-blowing website known as WikiLeaks , has committed no crimes in Australia by publishing over 250,000 United States diplomatic cables.
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Original:  McClelland stated that the Government's reaction to the Wikileaks issue was "prudent."
Revised:  McClelland stated that the Government's reaction to the WikiLeaks issue was "prudent."
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Original:  She well knows about the presumption of innocence,  said Bishop.
Revised:  She well knows about the presumption of innocence, " said Bishop.
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Original:  Further cables that the Government query the legality of would also be forwarded to the AFP as well.
Revised:  Further cables that the Government queries the legality of would also be forwarded to the AFP as well.
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Original:  Ms Gillard said at a press-conference in Sydney today that she did not intend to say that the release of the cables was illegal, but the fact that they were stolen was.
Revised:  Ms Gillard said at a press-conference in Sydney today that she did not intend to say that the release of the cables was illegal, but that their theft was.
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Original: Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard The Australian Federal Police (AFP) has stated that the whistle-blowing website known as WikiLeaks , has committed no crimes in Australia by publishing over 250,000 United States diplomatic cables.
Revised: Prime Minister of Australia, Julia Gillard The Australian Federal Police (AFP) has stated that the whistle-blowing website known as WikiLeaks has committed no crimes in Australia by publishing over 250,000 United States diplomatic cables.
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Original: The w:Amaerican Library Association (ALA) and civil rights organizations are observing Banned Books Week 2005 from September 24 until October 1, the last week in September.
Revised: The American Library Association (ALA) and civil rights organizations are observing Banned Books Week 2005 from September 24 until October 1, the last week in September.
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Original: The w:Amaerican Library Association (ALA) and civil rights organizations are observing Banned Books Week 2005 from September 24 until October 1, the last week in September.
Revised: The w:Amaerican Library Association (ALA) is observing Banned Books Week 2005 from September 24 until October 1, the last week in September.
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Original:  In Norwood Colorado, parents recently burnned copies of Rudolfo Anaya's "Bless Me, Ultima" after having them pulled from the High School curriculum   [
Revised:  In Norwood Colorado, parents recently burnned copies of Rudolfo Anaya's "Bless Me, Ultima" after having them pulled from the High School curriculum . [
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Original:  The company have also confirmed that the price of second-class stamps will be concurrently increased by 4p, increasing the value to £0.36.
Revised:  The company have also confirmed that the price of second-class stamps will be concurrently increased by 4p, increasing their value to £0.36.
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Original:   Moya Greene, the chief executive officer of the Royal Mail, commented : "We have thought carefully about these increases as we are conscious of the difficult economic circumstances our customers are facing . No-one likes to pay more and we regret having had to take these tough decisions on pricing.
Revised:  Moya Greene, the chief executive officer of the Royal Mail, commented about this decision. "We have thought carefully about these increases as we are conscious of the difficult economic circumstances our customers are facing . No-one likes to pay more and we regret having had to take these tough decisions on pricing.
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Original:  That means if we don’t generate more income, we will simply not be able to keep funding our six-days-a-week collection, sorting, transport and delivery operation to the UK’s 28m homes and businesses.  
Revised:  That means if we don’t generate more income, we will simply not be able to keep funding our six-days-a-week collection, sorting, transport and delivery operation to the UK’s 28m homes and businesses. " 
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Original: In the United Kingdom, the Royal Mail have announced that they will increase the price of first-class stamps by a record 5p from 4 April 2011.
Revised: In the United Kingdom, the Royal Mail have announced that they will increase the price of first-class stamps by a record 5p on April 4, 2011.
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Original: The Postal Services Commission allowed the Royal Mail to perform these actions on 8 November 2010.
Revised: The Postal Services Commission allowed the Royal Mail to perform these actions on November 8, 2010.
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Original:  The Postal Services Commission allowed the Royal Mail to perform these actions on November 8, 2010.
Revised:  The Postal Services Commission voted to allow the Royal Mail to perform these actions on November 8, 2010.
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Original:  The Postal Services Commission allowed the Royal Mail to perform these actions on November 8, 2010.
Revised:  The Postal Services Commission allowed the Royal Mail to perform these actions .
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Original:  The US Federal Communications Commission has extended the deadline for E911 compliance by VoIP providers till Oct 31, 2005.
Revised: right The US Federal Communications Commission has extended the deadline for E911 compliance by VoIP providers till Oct 31, 2005.
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Original:  Customers for whom an acknowledgment has not been received would have their service disconnected .
Revised:  Customers who did not acknowledge these limitations would have their service disconnected .
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Original:  Customers for whom an acknowledgment has not been received would have their service disconnected .
Revised:  Customers for whom an acknowledgment has not been received would have their services terminated .
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Original:  This extension gives providers extra time to continue to attempt to connect to the networks to 911 services and to warn users of the limitations.
Revised:  This extension gives providers extra time to continue to attempt to connect the networks to 911 services and to warn users of the limitations.
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Original:  If the FCC had not granted this extension at least 10,000 users would have to been disconnected.
Revised:  If the FCC had not granted this extension at least 10,000 users would have been disconnected.
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Original:  ” Vonage is devoting most energy to this
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Original:  ” Vonage is devoting most energy to this
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Original: The US Federal Communications Commission has extended the deadline for Enhanced 911 compliance by VoIP| (Voice over Internet Protocol) providers till Oct 31, 2005.
Revised: The US Federal Communications Commission has extended the deadline for Enhanced 911 compliance by VoIP| (Voice over Internet Protocol) providers until Oct 31, 2005.
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Original:  This extension gives providers extra time to continue to attempt to connect the networks to 911 services and to warn users of the limitations.
Revised:  This extension gives providers extra time to connect the networks to 911 services and to warn users of the limitations.
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Original:  This extension gives providers extra time to continue to attempt to connect the networks to 911 services and to warn users of the limitations.
Revised:  This extension gives providers extra time to continue to attempt to connect the networks to 911 services , and warn users of the limitations.
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Original:  If the FCC had not granted this extension  at least 10,000 users would have been disconnected.
Revised:  If the FCC had not granted this extension , at least 10,000 users would have been disconnected.
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Original:  VoIP providers who have not met the 90\% goal could face enforcement proceedings starting on Oct 31, 2005.
Revised:  VoIP providers who have not met the 90\% goal could face enforcement proceedings starting October 31, 2005.
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Original:  The tables outside the main audience hall include information about many other programs at MIT to support innovation -- the Lemelson Prize, and prizes for inventions by high school students across the country.
Revised:  The tables outside the main audience hall include information about many other programs at MIT to support innovation -- the MIT-Lemelson Prize, and prizes for inventions by high school students across the country.
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Original:  The tables outside the main audience hall include information about many other programs at MIT to support innovation -- the MIT-Lemelson Prize , and prizes for inventions by high school students across the country.
Revised:  Two tables outside the main audience hall include information about many other programs at MIT to support innovation -- the MIT-Lemelson Prize , and prizes for inventions by high school students across the country.
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Original:  The tables outside the main audience hall include information about many other programs at MIT to support innovation -- the MIT-Lemelson Prize , and prizes for inventions by high school students across the country.
Revised:  The tables outside the main audience hall display information about many other programs at MIT to support innovation -- the MIT-Lemelson Prize , and prizes for inventions by high school students across the country.
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Original:  The tables outside the main audience hall include information about many other programs at MIT to support innovation -- the MIT-Lemelson Prize , and prizes for inventions by high school students across the country.
Revised:  The tables outside the main audience hall include information about many other programs at MIT to support innovation , including the world-famous Lemelson-MIT Prize and awards highlighting work by high school students across the country.
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Original:  This year's Innovator of the Year  is Kevin Eggan, noted for his August publication in Science showing that cheek cells could be reprogrammed to become pluripotent stem cells.
Revised:  This year's Innovator of the Year " is Kevin Eggan, noted for his August publication in Science showing that cheek cells could be reprogrammed to become pluripotent stem cells.
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Original:  The Humanitarian of the Year  , who "could just as well have been given the Innovator of the Year," is Saul Griffith, founder of Squid Labs, which pioneered a system to make customized glasses 'for $5 in 5 minutes' -- covering the complete range of prescription lenses.
Revised:  And the " Humanitarian of the Year , who "could just as well have been given the Innovator of the Year," is Saul Griffith, founder of Squid Labs, which pioneered a system to make customized glasses 'for $5 in 5 minutes' -- covering the complete range of prescription lenses.
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Original:  The Humanitarian of the Year  , who "could just as well have been given the Innovator of the Year," is Saul Griffith, founder of Squid Labs, which pioneered a system to make customized glasses 'for $5 in 5 minutes' -- covering the complete range of prescription lenses.
Revised:  The Humanitarian of the Year " , who "could just as well have been given the Innovator of the Year," is Saul Griffith, founder of Squid Labs, which pioneered a system to make customized glasses 'for $5 in 5 minutes' -- covering the complete range of prescription lenses.
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Original:  And the "Humanitarian of the Year" , who "could just as well have been given the Innovator of the Year," is Saul Griffith, founder of Squid Labs, which pioneered a system to make customized glasses 'for $5 in 5 minutes' -- covering the complete range of prescription lenses.
Revised:  And the "Humanitarian of the Year" is Saul Griffith, founder of Squid Labs, which pioneered a system to make customized glasses 'for $5 in 5 minutes' -- covering the complete range of prescription lenses.
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Original: MIT this week plays host to the Technology Review's Emerging Technologies Conference (ETC) 1. ETC is supported and organized by the Technology Review magazine, and features celebrated innovators and engineers from around the country.
Revised: MIT this week plays host to the Technology Review's Emerging Technologies Conference (ETC) . ETC is supported and organized by the Technology Review magazine, and features celebrated innovators and engineers from around the country.
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Original:  Footnotes 1 Not to be confused with the O'Reilly Emerging Technology Conference (ETech)
Revised:  Footnotes Not to be confused with the O'Reilly Emerging Technology Conference (ETech)
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Original:  He died as a result of complications from multiple sclerosis, confirmed New York's Michael Werner Gallery .
Revised:  New York's Michael Werner Gallery .
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Original:  Born in Glendale, California, on January 15, 1941, the highly experimental musician created several unique and influential albums from 1967-1982 , backed by a frequently changing group of musicians known as The Magic Band.
Revised:  Born in Glendale, California, on January 15, 1941, the highly experimental musician created several unique and influential albums from 1967 through to 1982 , backed by a frequently changing group of musicians known as The Magic Band.
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Original:  His most famous album, Trout Mask Replica (1969) melded free jazz, blues-rock, and avant-garde styles to create a critically acclaimed ( although commercially unsuccessful) work.
Revised:  His most famous album, Trout Mask Replica (1969) melded free jazz, blues-rock, and avant-garde styles to create a critically acclaimed ( albeit commercially unsuccessful) work.
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Original:   He is survived by his wife of 40 years, Janet
Revised:  Despite no formal training, it was under his own name, and as a painter, that Van Vliet experienced his greatest commercial success. His first exhibition was in Liverpool, in 1972. In the wake of this he was advised that as a painter he would be unlikely to be taken seriously unless he abandoned his musical career. He is survived by his wife of 40 years, Janet
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Original:   He is survived by his wife of 40 years, Janet
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Original: Born in Glendale, California , on January 15, 1941, the highly experimental musician created several unique and influential albums from 1967 through to 1982, backed by a frequently changing group of musicians known as The Magic Band.
Revised: Born in Glendale, California on January 15, 1941, the highly experimental musician created several unique and influential albums from 1967 through to 1982, backed by a frequently changing group of musicians known as The Magic Band.
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Original:  A childhood friend of Frank Zappa, Beefheart was christened Don Glen Viet, later changing this , and adopting the stage name of Captain Beefheart at Zappas suggestion.
Revised:  A childhood friend of Frank Zappa, Beefheart was christened Don Glen Viet, later changing this and adopting the stage name of Captain Beefheart at Zappas suggestion.
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Original:  A childhood friend of Frank Zappa, Beefheart was christened Don Glen Viet, later changing this , and adopting the stage name of Captain Beefheart at Zappas suggestion.
Revised:  A childhood friend of Frank Zappa, Beefheart was christened Don Glen Viet, later changing this , and adopting the stage name of Captain Beefheart at Zappa's suggestion.
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Original:  Despite no formal training, it was under his own name , and as a painter, that Van Vliet experienced his greatest commercial success.
Revised:  Despite no formal training, it was under his own name and as a painter, that Van Vliet experienced his greatest commercial success.
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Original:  New York's Michael Werner Gallery confirmed the cause of death as complications with multiple sclerosis, a condition Van Vliet battled for many years.
Revised:  New York's Michael Werner Gallery confirmed the cause of death as complications with multiple sclerosis, a condition Van Vliet sufferd from for many years.
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Original:   Though the results are backed by the nation's top legal body, deadly protests have erupted with demonstrators and the nation's former president Alassane Ouattara calling the election a fraud.
Revised:  Though the results are backed by the nation's top legal body, deadly protests have erupted with demonstrators and Ouattara calling the election a fraud.
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Original: The United Nations mission in Abidjan, Ivory Coast has said that one of its convoys and mission headquarters was attacked by masked gunman in military uniforms.
Revised: The United Nations mission in Abidjan, Ivory Coast has said that one of its convoys and mission headquarters was attacked by masked gunmen in military uniforms.
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Original: "[A convoy] was followed by a group of six armed men dressed in military clothing on board  a civilian vehicle.
Revised: "[A convoy] was followed by a group of six armed men dressed in military clothing on board of a civilian vehicle.
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