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Original:  Recent developments in communication technology, such as the spread of broadband services , the growth of e-mail and the advent of practical home video conferencing, have enabled more people to work from home rather than commuting.
Revised:  Recent developments in communication technology, such as the spread of communication services such as broadband, e-mail and the advent of practical home video conferencing, have enabled more people to work from home rather than commuting.
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Original:  Recent developments in communication technology, such as the spread of broadband services , the growth of e-mail and the advent of practical home video conferencing, have enabled more people to work from home rather than commuting.
Revised:  Recent developments in communication technology, such as the spread of broadband services , the growth of e-mail and practical home video conferencing, have enabled more people to work from home rather than commuting.
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Original:  Although this can occur either in the city or in the suburbs, the effect is generally decentralizing, which works against the largest advantage of the centre city, which is easier access to information and supplies due to centralization.
Revised:  This can occur either in the city or in the suburbs, the effect is generally decentralizing, which works against the largest advantage of the centre city, which is easier access to information and supplies due to centralization.
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Original:  Although this can occur either in the city or in the suburbs, the effect is generally decentralizing, which works against the largest advantage of the centre city, which is easier access to information and supplies due to centralization.
Revised:  Although this can occur either in the city or in the suburbs, thus giving the suburbs the same advantages information and supplies due to centralization.
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Original:  Although this can occur either in the city or in the suburbs, the effect is generally decentralizing, which works against the largest advantage of the centre city, which is easier access to information and supplies due to centralization.
Revised:  Although this can occur either in the city or in the suburbs, the effect is generally decentralizing, which works against the largest advantage of the centre city, which is easier access to information and supplies as centralized business had
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Original:  Fossil polysporangiophytes are known that have no vascular tissue, and so are not tracheophytes.
Revised:  Fossils of extinct polysporangiophytes are known that have no vascular tissue, and so are not tracheophytes.
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Original:  Fossils of extinct polysporangiophytes are known that have no vascular tissue, and so are not tracheophytes.
Revised:  Extinct polysporangiophytes are known that have no vascular tissue, and so are not tracheophytes.
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Original:  Taylor et al. speculate that this may have been because his reconstruction looked very unusual and the fossil was older than was expected., p. 225ff From 1917 onwards, Robert Kidston and William H. Lang published a series of papers describing fossil plants from the Rhynie chert – a fine-grained sedimentary rock found near the village of Rhynie, Aberdeenshire , Scotland , now dated to the Pragian of the Lower Devonian (around ).
Revised:  Taylor et al. speculate that this was because his reconstruction looked very unusual and the fossil was older than was expected., p. 225ff From 1917 onwards, Robert Kidston and William H. Lang published a series of papers describing fossil plants from the Rhynie chert – a fine-grained sedimentary rock found near the village of Rhynie, Aberdeenshire , Scotland , now dated to the Pragian of the Lower Devonian (around ).
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Original:  Taylor et al. speculate that this may have been because his reconstruction looked very unusual and the fossil was older than was expected., p. 225ff From 1917 onwards, Robert Kidston and William H. Lang published a series of papers describing fossil plants from the Rhynie chert – a fine-grained sedimentary rock found near the village of Rhynie, Aberdeenshire , Scotland , now dated to the Pragian of the Lower Devonian (around ).
Revised:  Taylor et al. speculate that this may have been because his reconstruction looked very unusual and the fossil was older than was expected., p. 225ff From 1917 onwards, Robert Kidston and William H. Lang published a series of papers describing fossil plants from the Rhynie chert – a fine-grained sedimentary rock found near the village of Rhynie, Aberdeenshire , now dated to the Pragian of the Lower Devonian (around ).
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Original:  2014 April 27 Canonization of Pope John XXIII and Pope John Paul II 2014 May 25 Death of Wojciech Jaruzelski 2015 May Presidential election 2015 August 6 Andrzej Duda becomes President
Revised:  2014 April 27 Canonization of Pope John Paul II 2014 May 25 Death of Wojciech Jaruzelski 2015 May Presidential election 2015 August 6 Andrzej Duda becomes President
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Original:  with the Holy Roman Emperor Bolesław I's intervention in the Kievan succession crisis 1025 April 18 Coronation of Bolesław I Chrobry June 17 Death of Bolesław I Chrobry the Brave December 25 Coronation of Mieszko II Lambert  1032 Death of Duke Bezprym 1034 May 10 Death of Mieszko II Lambert 1034–39 Pagan uprisings against Christianization 1058 November 28 Death of Casimir I the Restorer 1076 Coronation of Bolesław II the Bold
Revised:  with Henry II Bolesław I's intervention in the Kievan succession crisis 1025 April 18 Coronation of Bolesław I Chrobry June 17 Death of Bolesław I Chrobry the Brave December 25 Coronation of Mieszko II Lambert 1032 Death of Duke Bezprym 1034 May 10 Death of Mieszko II Lambert 1034–39 Pagan uprisings against Christianization 1058 November 28 Death of Casimir I the Restorer 1076 Coronation of Bolesław II the Bold
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Original:  By 1919, the legitimate government of the Alash Autonomy , Vinland, Bulgaria had been effectively dismantled by Soviet force, its territory being integrated into the nascent Soviet Union.
Revised:  By 1919, the legitimate government of the Alash Autonomy had been effectively dismantled by Soviet force, its territory being integrated into the nascent Soviet Union.
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Original:  February, 1996. translate.de
Revised:  February, 1996. 
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Original:  Bibliography Books Technology and the Canadian Mind: Innis, McLuhan, Grant (1984) The Postmodern Scene: Excremental Culture and Hyper-Aesthetics (1987) (with David Cook) Panic Encyclopedia: The Definitive Guide to the Postmodern Scene (1989) (with David Cook and Marilouise Kroker) The Possessed Individual: Technology and the French Postmodern (1992) SPASM: Virtual Reality, Android Music, and Electric Flesh (1993) Data Trash: Theory of the Virtual Class (1994) (with Michael A.
Revised: He is married with Marilouise Kroker. Bibliography Books Technology and the Canadian Mind: Innis, McLuhan, Grant (1984) The Postmodern Scene: Excremental Culture and Hyper-Aesthetics (1987) (with David Cook) Panic Encyclopedia: The Definitive Guide to the Postmodern Scene (1989) (with David Cook and Marilouise Kroker) The Possessed Individual: Technology and the French Postmodern (1992) SPASM: Virtual Reality, Android Music, and Electric Flesh (1993) Data Trash: Theory of the Virtual Class (1994) (with Michael A.
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Original:  Sponsors Corporate sponsors of Augie's Quest have included Orangetheory Fitness, Zumba, Shea Homes, ClubCorp, Life Time Fitness, LA Fitness, Curves, Safeway, Oakley, Jenny Craig, Life Fitness, and Equinox  among other companies.
Revised:  Sponsors Corporate sponsors of Augie's Quest have included Orangetheory Fitness, Zumba, Shea Homes, ClubCorp, Life Time Fitness, LA Fitness, Curves, Safeway, Oakley, Jenny Craig, Life Fitness, and Equinox , among other companies.
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Original:  He and his wife, Lynne, live in Corona Del Mar, California  and have four children and seven grandchildren.
Revised:  He and his wife, Lynne, live in Corona Del Mar, California , and have four children and seven grandchildren.
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Original: He is noted for fighting against amyotrophic lateral sclerosis (ALS) by creating "Augie's Quest", which has raised over $45 million in funds for research into the disease.
Revised: He was diagnosed with amyotrophic lateral sclerosis (ALS) by creating "Augie's Quest", which has raised over $45 million in funds for research into the disease.
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Original:  Five for Fighting song In 2009,  Five for Fighting wrote a song in Nieto's honor on his album Slice to help raise  funds for Augie's Quest.
Revised:  Five for Fighting song In 2009, Five for Fighting wrote a song in Nieto's honor on his album Slice to help raise awareness and funds for Augie's Quest.
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Original: He was diagnosed with amyotrophic lateral sclerosis (ALS)  in 2005, and established "Augie's Quest to Cure ALS", which has raised over $75 million in funds for research into the disease.
Revised: He was diagnosed with amyotrophic lateral sclerosis (ALS) disease in 2005, and established "Augie's Quest to Cure ALS", which has raised over $75 million in funds for research into the disease.
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Original:  People who live in cultures of honor, perceive family as the central institution in their society and a person's social identity depends largely on their family.
Revised: Family honor (or honour) is an abstract concept involving the perceived quality of worthiness and respectability that affects the social standing and the self-evaluation of a group of related people, both corporately and individually. The family is viewed as the main source of honor and the community highly values the relationship between honor and the family. The conduct of family members reflects upon family honor and the way the family perceives itself, and is perceived by others. Family honor can be dependent upon many factors and areas that are affected by family honor include multiple aspects of lifestyle such as social status, religion, clothing, eating, education, job or career, ownership such as real estate, and marriage. People who live in cultures of honor, perceive family as the central institution in their society and a person's social identity depends largely on their family.
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Original:   Family honor within society Because the approval of honor is dependent upon the recognition of others, during ancient times individuals worked hard for the approval of their peers within their societal cultures.
Revised:  Societies in which "family honor" is considered highly important generally place a correspondingly high degree of restriction of the freedom of women. In these cultures, a family may defend its honor, or may seek reparation or revenge if the family honor is perceived to have been abused or treated with disrespect. In Ancient Rome, sexual activity of married women outside of their marriage was seen as dishonor to the family and it was legal for men to kill their wives or married daughters that shamed the family through adultery. Reasoning for the designation of women to private and/or nonmale areas comes from the ancient tradition of a woman's place in the world. Women are not seen as independent individuals, but rather extensions of their male counterparts' identity and honor. Family honor within society Because the approval of honor is dependent upon the recognition of others, during ancient times individuals worked hard for the approval of their peers within their societal cultures.
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Original:  Using patterns of behaviour observed in Denmark, Norway and the UK Schlytter estimated that there were 240.000 youth suffer under an honour culture (Swedish: hedersförtryck '' ).
Revised:  Using patterns of behaviour observed in Denmark, Norway and the UK Schlytter estimated that there were 240.000 youth suffer under an honour culture (Swedish: hedersförtryck ).
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Original:  Using patterns of behaviour observed in Denmark, Norway and the UK  Schlytter estimated that there were 240.000 youth suffer under an honour culture (Swedish: hedersförtryck).
Revised:  Using patterns of behaviour observed in Denmark, Norway and the UK , Schlytter estimated that there were 240.000 youth suffer under an honour culture (Swedish: hedersförtryck).
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Original: Far East Asia Contrastingly in other Asian cultures, especially for families in South Asia and the Far East, family honor depends on other factors such as education.
Revised:  East Asia Contrastingly in other Asian cultures, especially for families in South Asia and the Far East, family honor depends on other factors such as education.
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Original:  Preservation of family honor is not only important for respectability of family members in society but also affects the fate of all family members.
Revised:  Preservation of family boner is not only important for respectability of family members in society but also affects the fate of all family members.
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Original:   A number of states have infant mental health organizations affiliated with WAIMH  .
Revised:  Zero-to-Three was responsible for creating the Diagnostic Classification: 0-3 (DC:0-3) and more recently a revised version (DC:0-3R) that allows mental health professionals to give a mental health diagnosis to infants, toddlers, and their relationships with their caregivers when suffering and dysfunction reach a level suggestive of psychopathology that requires intervention.Zero-to-Three: National Center for Infants, Toddlers, and Families (2005). Diagnostic Classification: 0-3 Revised (DC:0-3R). Washington, D.C.: Zero-to-Three Press, Inc. Supported by empirical research, Zero-to-Three and WAIMH have both advocated for the notion that just because babies can not tell you their symptoms, does not mean that they do not suffer from mental health problems. A number of states have infant mental health organizations affiliated with WAIMH .
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Original: Infant mental health most often implies interdisciplinary practice that began with the work of Selma Fraiberg and her article "Ghosts in the Nursery" among other key figures  Fraiberg S, Adelson E, & Shapiro V (1975).
Revised: Infant mental health most often implies interdisciplinary practice that began with the work of Selma Fraiberg and her article "Ghosts in the Nursery" among other key figures . Fraiberg S, Adelson E, & Shapiro V (1975).
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Original:  Columbus, OH: Ohio State University Press, 1987] . . Infant mental health practitioners provide relationship-focused interventions to parents, foster parents, and other primary caregivers together with their infants and toddlers.
Revised:  Columbus, OH: Ohio State University Press, 1987] . Infant mental health practitioners provide relationship-focused interventions to parents, foster parents, and other primary caregivers together with their infants and toddlers.
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Original:  Washington, D.C.: Zero-to-Three Press, Inc. Supported by empirical research, Zero-to-Three and WAIMH have both advocated for the notion that just because babies can not tell you their symptoms, does not mean that they do not suffer from mental health problems.
Revised:  Washington, D.C.: Zero-to-Three Press, Inc. Both Zero-to-Three and WAIMH have both advocated for the notion that just because babies can not tell you their symptoms, does not mean that they do not suffer from mental health problems.
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Original:  He also headlined a benefit concert - with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens - for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, 1979 Cite review by Geoffrey Himes in the Washington Post, June 9, 1979%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% .
Revised:  He also headlined a benefit concert — with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens - for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, 1979 Cite review by Geoffrey Himes in the Washington Post, June 9, 1979%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% .
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Original:  He also headlined a benefit concert - with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens - for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, 1979 Cite review by Geoffrey Himes in the Washington Post, June 9, 1979%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% .
Revised:  He also headlined a benefit concert - with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens — for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, 1979 Cite review by Geoffrey Himes in the Washington Post, June 9, 1979%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% .
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Original:  He also headlined a benefit concert - with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens - for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, 1979 Cite review by Geoffrey Himes in the Washington Post, June 9, 1979%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% .
Revised:  He also headlined a benefit concert - with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens - for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, Cite review by Geoffrey Himes in the Washington Post, June 9, 1979%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% .
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Original:  He also headlined a benefit concert - with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens - for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, 1979 Cite review by Geoffrey Himes in the Washington Post, June 9, 1979%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% .
Revised:  He also headlined a benefit concert - with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens - for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, 1979 %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% .
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Original:  He also headlined a benefit concert - with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens - for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, 1979 Cite review by Geoffrey Himes in the Washington Post, June 9, 1979%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% .
Revised:  He also headlined a benefit concert - with bluegrass artist Hazel Dickens - for the striking coal miners of Stearns, Kentucky, at the Lisner Auditorium in Washington, D.C. on June 8, 1979 Cite review by Geoffrey Himes in the Washington Post, June 9, 1979%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 1979.
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Original: Spanish Civil War songs Seeger had been a fervent supporter of the Republican (communist) forces in the Spanish Civil War.
Revised: Spanish Civil War songs Seeger had been a fervent supporter of the Republican forces in the Spanish Civil War.
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Original: Reflection on support for Soviet Communism In 1982, Seeger performed at a benefit concert for August 31, 1982 demonstrations in Poland  .
Revised: Reflection on support for Soviet Communism In 1982, Seeger performed at a benefit concert for the 1982 demonstrations in Poland .
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Original:  On November 1, 2021, the United States Postal Service announced that it will be releasing a commemorative Pete Seeger “Forever” stamp in 2022.
Revised:  On November 1, 2021, the United States Postal Service announced that it will be releasing a commemorative Pete Seeger "Forever" stamp in 2022.
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Original:  The stamp is based on a photograph of Seeger playing a long neck banjo, taken by Seeger ’ s son Daniel some time in the early 1960s.
Revised:  The stamp is based on a photograph of Seeger playing a long neck banjo, taken by Seeger ' s son Daniel some time in the early 1960s.
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Original:  Elizabeth Mitchell, Emma's Revolution, Toni Blackman, Kim & Reggie Harris, Magpie, Abrazos Orcchestra , Nyraine, George Wein, The Vanaver Caravan, White Tiger Society, Lorre Wyatt, AKIR, Adira & Alana Amram, Aurora Barnes, The Owens Brothers, The Tony Lee Thomas Band, Jay Ungar & Molly Mason, Ney York Sity Labor Chorus, Roland Moussa, Roots Revelators, Kristen Graves, Bob Reid, Hudson River Sloop Singers, Walkabout Clearwater Chorus, Betty & The baby Boomers, Work O'
Revised:  Elizabeth Mitchell, Emma's Revolution, Toni Blackman, Kim & Reggie Harris, Magpie, Abrazos Orchestra , Nyraine, George Wein, The Vanaver Caravan, White Tiger Society, Lorre Wyatt, AKIR, Adira & Alana Amram, Aurora Barnes, The Owens Brothers, The Tony Lee Thomas Band, Jay Ungar & Molly Mason, Ney York Sity Labor Chorus, Roland Moussa, Roots Revelators, Kristen Graves, Bob Reid, Hudson River Sloop Singers, Walkabout Clearwater Chorus, Betty & The baby Boomers, Work O'
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Original:  Elizabeth Mitchell, Emma's Revolution, Toni Blackman, Kim & Reggie Harris, Magpie, Abrazos Orcchestra , Nyraine, George Wein, The Vanaver Caravan, White Tiger Society, Lorre Wyatt, AKIR, Adira & Alana Amram, Aurora Barnes, The Owens Brothers, The Tony Lee Thomas Band, Jay Ungar & Molly Mason, Ney York Sity Labor Chorus, Roland Moussa, Roots Revelators, Kristen Graves, Bob Reid, Hudson River Sloop Singers, Walkabout Clearwater Chorus, Betty & The baby Boomers, Work O'
Revised:  Elizabeth Mitchell, Emma's Revolution, Toni Blackman, Kim & Reggie Harris, Magpie, Abrazos Orcchestra , Nyraine, George Wein, The Vanaver Caravan, White Tiger Society, Lorre Wyatt, AKIR, Adira & Alana Amram, Aurora Barnes, The Owens Brothers, The Tony Lee Thomas Band, Jay Ungar & Molly Mason, New York City Labor Chorus, Roland Moussa, Roots Revelators, Kristen Graves, Bob Reid, Hudson River Sloop Singers, Walkabout Clearwater Chorus, Betty & The baby Boomers, Work O'
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Original: He was Union Ministry of Communications and Information Technology (India).
Revised: He was Union Minister of Communications and Information Technology (India).
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Original:  He unsuccessfully contested the Dum Dum Lok Sabha constituency in the 2009 general election where the All India Trinamool Congress (an earlier National Democratic Alliance ally) candidate (who won and became the MP) got 458,988 votes whereas the Communist Party of India (Marxist) candidate got 438,510 votes) and he polled only 55,679 votes.
Revised:  He unsuccessfully contested the Dum Dum Lok Sabha constituency in the 2009 general election where the All India Trinamool Congress candidate (who won and became the MP) got 458,988 votes whereas the Communist Party of India (Marxist) candidate got 438,510 votes) and he polled only 55,679 votes.
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Original:  He holds the record as the youngest Prop forward to ever play for South Africa.
Revised:  He holds the record as the youngest prop forward to ever play for South Africa.
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Original: Wife File:MustafaKemalPasha LatifeHanim%DIFDELCMD < &%%% Family early1923.jpg| Atatürk and Latife Hanım ( Latife and Kemal at one of the tours of Anatolia.
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Original: Wife File:MustafaKemalPasha LatifeHanim%DIFDELCMD < &%%% Family early1923.jpg| Atatürk and Latife Hanım ( Latife and Kemal at one of the tours of Anatolia.
Revised: Wife File:MustafaKemalPasha %DIFDELCMD < &%%% Family early1923.jpg| Atatürk and Latife Hanım ( Latife and Kemal at one of the tours of Anatolia.
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Original: Wife File:MustafaKemalPasha LatifeHanim%DIFDELCMD < &%%% Family early1923.jpg| Atatürk and Latife Hanım ( Latife and Kemal at one of the tours of Anatolia.
Revised: Wife File:MustafaKemalPasha LatifeHanim%DIFDELCMD < &%%% Atatürk and Latife Hanım ( Latife and Kemal at one of the tours of Anatolia.
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