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Original: [[File:Yoweri Museveni.jpg||Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni ( Circa 2003) . ]] In a nation where homosexuality is already a criminal offense punishable by up to fourteen years in jail, this bill would would raise that penalty to life in prison.
Revised: [[File:Yoweri Museveni.jpg||Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni ( 2003) . ]] In a nation where homosexuality is already a criminal offense punishable by up to fourteen years in jail, this bill would would raise that penalty to life in prison.
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Original: [[File:Yoweri Museveni.jpg||Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni ( Circa 2003) . ]] In a nation where homosexuality is already a criminal offense punishable by up to fourteen years in jail, this bill would would raise that penalty to life in prison.
Revised: [[File:Yoweri Museveni.jpg||Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni ( Circa 2003) ]] In a nation where homosexuality is already a criminal offense punishable by up to fourteen years in jail, this bill would would raise that penalty to life in prison.
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Original:  Until President Museveni publicly spoke out, the bill was widely supported by the ruling majority party, the National Resistance Movement (NRM), and, as result, was expected to easily pass with a significant number of votes in its favor.
Revised:  Until President Museveni publicly spoke out, this proposal was widely supported by the ruling majority party, the National Resistance Movement (NRM), and, as result, was expected to easily pass with a significant number of votes in its favor.
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Original:  Museveni stressed in this statement on Wednesday, that the Member of Parliament who proposed the legislation in question, although he is a member of the NRM, did so as an individual and was not behooved by any government official to draft it .
Revised:  Museveni stressed in this statement on Wednesday, that the Member of Parliament who drafted the legislation in question, although he is a member of the NRM, did so as an individual and was not behooved by any government official to draft it .
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Original:  Museveni stressed in this statement on Wednesday, that the Member of Parliament who proposed the legislation in question, although he is a member of the NRM, did so as an individual and was not behooved by any government official to draft it .
Revised:  Museveni stressed in this statement on Wednesday, that the Member of Parliament who proposed the legislation in question, although he is a member of the NRM, was not behooved by any government official to draft it .
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Original:  Museveni stressed in this statement on Wednesday, that the Member of Parliament who proposed the legislation in question, although he is a member of the NRM, did so as an individual and was not behooved by any government official to draft it .
Revised:  Museveni stressed in this statement on Wednesday, that the Member of Parliament who proposed the legislation in question, although he is a member of the NRM, did so as an individual and was not behooved by any government official and did so solely as an individual .
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Original:  In light of all that has occurred, Museveni told his party that the issue as of today was no longer a parliamentary one, and that it is to be solely discussed and handled accordingly by he and his cabinet alone
Revised:  In light of all that has occurred, Museveni told his party that the issue as of today was no longer a parliamentary one, and that it is to be discussed and handled accordingly by he and his cabinet alone
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Original:  [[File:Yoweri Museveni.jpg||Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni (2003) ]] In a nation where homosexuality is already a criminal offense punishable by up to fourteen years in jail, this bill would would raise that penalty to life in prison.
Revised:  [[File:Yoweri Museveni.jpg||Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni (2003) ]] In a nation where homosexuality is already a criminal offense punishable by up to fourteen years in jail, this bill would raise that penalty to life in prison.
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Original: The White House refused to comment Monday on Karl Rove’s involvement in the leak of the name of a covert CIA Agent Valerie Plame.
Revised: The White House refused to comment Monday on Karl Rove’s involvement in the leak of the name of the covert CIA agent Valerie Plame.
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Original:  Judith Miller, a reporter for the New York Times , has been jailed for violating a  court order by refusing to testify about the source.
Revised:  The New York Times , has been jailed for violating a court order by refusing to testify about the source.
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Original:  Judith Miller, a reporter for the New York Times , has been jailed for violating a  court order by refusing to testify about the source.
Revised:  Judith Miller, a reporter for the New York Times , has been jailed for violating a court order by refusing to testify about her source.
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Original:  The New York Times reporter, Judith Miller, was jailed for violating a w:contempt of courtcontempt of court order by refusing to testify about her source  .
Revised:  The New York Times reporter, Judith Miller, was jailed for violating a contempt of court order by refusing to testify about her source .
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Original:  The New York Times reporter, Judith Miller, was jailed for violating a contempt of court order by refusing to testify about her source, and the TIMES magazine reporter Matthew Cooper also involved with withholding his source now appears ready to testify.
Revised:  The New York Times reporter, Judith Miller, was jailed for violating a contempt of court order by refusing to testify about her source, and TIME magazine reporter Matthew Cooper also involved with withholding his source now appears ready to testify.
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Original:  Kerry spoke from the podium and answered reporters  questions, while Clinton nodded in the background.
Revised:  Kerry spoke from the podium and answered reporters ' questions, while Clinton nodded in the background.
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Original: In a televised report on CNN Tuesday morning, U.S. Senators John Kerry and Hillary Clinton expressed their belief that Karl Rove, a top advisor to President  Bush, should be fired.
Revised: In a televised report on CNN Tuesday morning, U.S. Senators John Kerry and Hillary Clinton expressed their belief that Karl Rove, a top advisor to President George W. Bush, should be fired.
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Original:  The White House refused to comment Monday on Karl Rove ’ s involvement in the leak of the name of the covert CIA agent Valerie Plame.
Revised:  The White House refused to comment Monday on Karl Rove ' s involvement in the leak of the name of the covert CIA agent Valerie Plame.
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Original:  Her husband, a former ambassador under the first president Bush, Joseph Wilson has been proven correct in his assertions that Iraq was not attempting to gain or purchased Uranium from Niger.
Revised:  Her husband, a former ambassador under the first president Bush, Joseph Wilson has been proven correct in his assertions that Iraq was not attempting to gain or purchased uranium from Niger.
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Original:  During the most heated part of the exchange, David Gregory of NBC News called the refusal to comment “ridiculous.”
Revised:  During the most heated part of the exchange, David Gregory of NBC News called the refusal to comment "ridiculous."
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Original:  External media White House press briefin
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He added, “Where men, women and children are suffering under the heaviest of burdens, that place must, for that moment, become the centre of our world’s attention, the world’s compassion and the world’s humanitarian help.” France is also sending aid to the French-speaking country, which at one time was a colony of France known as Saint-Domingue.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% France is also sending aid to the French-speaking country, which at one time was a colony of France known as Saint-Domingue.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Spain has pledged 4.3 million (  3 million euros) of aid money and has 150 tons of aid ready to be delivered.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Spain has pledged 4.3 million ( € 3 million euros) of aid money and has 150 tons of aid ready to be delivered.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Spain has pledged 4.3 million (  3 million euros) of aid money and has 150 tons of aid ready to be delivered.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Spain has pledged 4.3 million ( 3 million ) in aid money and has 150 tons of aid ready to be delivered.
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Original: China is also pledging aid to the country, despite the fact of official diplomatic ties between the two countries.
Revised: China is also pledging aid to the country, despite the lack of official diplomatic ties between the two countries.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Israel's civilian ZAKA search and rescue volunteer organization also sent a small team, which was operating along with the IDF-dispatched team.
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Original: An official for Cape Town released a statement saying  " Although the beaches have been declared safe, both Shark Spotting and lifesaving services will continue.”
Revised: An official for Cape Town released a statement saying that " Although the beaches have been declared safe, both Shark Spotting and lifesaving services will continue.”
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Original: An official for Cape Town released a statement saying  " Although the beaches have been declared safe, both Shark Spotting and lifesaving services will continue.”
Revised: An official for Cape Town released a statement saying " although the beaches have been declared safe, both Shark Spotting and lifesaving services will continue.”
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Original:  Swimmer Kyle Johnston spoke to a Cape Town newspaper saying "We looked at the walkway and saw people waving towels at us, then we looked further out to sea and saw what looked like blood, and a man's leg come up."
Revised:  Swimmer Kyle Johnston spoke to a Cape Town newspaper , saying: "We looked at the walkway and saw people waving towels at us, then we looked further out to sea and saw what looked like blood, and a man's leg come up."
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Original: This was the second fatal shark attack on the same beach since 2004 ;
Revised: This was the second fatal shark attack on the same beach since 2004 , when
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Original:  The beaches were closed after a man from Zimbabwe was killed by a shark on  Fish Hoek beach.
Revised:  They were closed after a man from Zimbabwe was killed by a shark on Fish Hoek beach.
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Original:  The beaches were closed after a man from Zimbabwe was killed by a shark on  Fish Hoek beach.
Revised:  The beaches were closed after a man from Zimbabwe was killed by a shark on the Fish Hoek beach.
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Original:  The attack hit a militant training camp on the border between Pakistan's North and South Waziristan tribal region.
Revised:  The attack hit a militant training camp on the border between Pakistan's North and South Waziristantribal region.
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Original:  The attack hit a militant training camp on the border between Pakistan's North and South Waziristantribal region.
Revised:  The attack hit a militant training camp on the border between Pakistan's North and South Waziristan tribal region.
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Original: Fat around the waist has a tendancy to release fatty acids, which are toxic.
Revised: Fat around the waist has a tendency to release fatty acids, which are toxic.
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Original:  However, that found on curvy bums, thighs and hips actually traps fatty acids, as well as being associated with a reduced risk of diabeties and heart conditions.
Revised:  However, that found on curvy bums, thighs and hips actually traps fatty acids, as well as being associated with a reduced risk of diabetes and heart conditions.
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Original:  It releases hormones that help control blood sugar levels and keep arteries in good condition by preventing blockages with an anti-inflamatory . Belly fat releases inflamatroy substances called cytokines and it is these that is trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
Revised:  It releases hormones that help control blood sugar levels and keep arteries in good condition by preventing blockages with an anti-inflammatory . Belly fat releases inflamatroy substances called cytokines and it is these that is trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
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Original:  It releases hormones that help control blood sugar levels and keep arteries in good condition by preventing blockages with an anti-inflamatory . Belly fat releases inflamatroy substances called cytokines and it is these that is trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
Revised:  It releases hormones that help control blood sugar levels and keep arteries in good condition by preventing blockages with an anti-inflamatory . Belly fat releases inflammatory substances called cytokines and it is these that is trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
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Original:  A lack of fat in the areas identified can also lead to metaboloc chaos such as that which occurs in Cushing's syndrome.
Revised:  A lack of fat in the areas identified can also lead to metabolic chaos such as that which occurs in Cushing's syndrome.
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Original: thighs and derrière may enjoy health benefits from her shape The owner of these buttocks may also enjoy health benefits from her shape The owner of these buttocks will certainly enjoy health benefits from her shape The owner of these buttocks will off course enjoy health benefits from her shape The owner of these buttocks will obviously enjoy health benefits from her shape A new study conducted by researchers at Oxford University has concluded that women with fat around their bum,
Revised: thighs and derrière may enjoy health benefits from her shape A new study conducted by researchers at Oxford University has concluded that women with fat around their bum,
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Original: Belly fat releases inflammatory substances called cytokines and it is these that is trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
Revised: Belly fat releases inflammatory substances called cytokines and it is these that are trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
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Original: The owner of these curvy thighs and derrière may enjoy health benefits from her shape  A new study conducted by researchers at Oxford University has concluded that women with fat around their bum, hips and thighs will have a reduced risk from various ailments.
Revised: The owner of these curvy thighs and derrière may enjoy health benefits from her shape The owner of these buttocks will off course enjoy health benefits from her shape The owner of these buttocks will obviously enjoy health benefits from her shape A new study conducted by researchers at Oxford University has concluded that women with fat around their bum, hips and thighs will have a reduced risk from various ailments.
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Original:  Belly fat releases inflammatory substances called cytokines and it is these that are trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
Revised:  Belly fat releases inflammatory substances called cytokines and it is these that is trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
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Original: The owner of these curvy thighs and derrière may enjoy health benefits from her shape The owner of these buttocks will off course enjoy health benefits from her shape The owner of these buttocks will obviously enjoy health benefits from her shape A new study conducted by researchers at Oxford University has concluded that women with fat around their bum, hips and thighs will have a reduced risk from various ailments.
Revised: The owner of these curvy thighs and derrière may enjoy health benefits from her shape A new study conducted by researchers at Oxford University has concluded that women with fat around their bum, hips and thighs will have a reduced risk from various ailments.
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Original:  Belly fat releases inflammatory substances called cytokines and it is these that is trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
Revised:  Belly fat releases inflammatory substances called cytokines and it is these that are trapped by the fat on curvy hips, bottoms and thighs.
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Original:  having not been wearing seatbelts.
Revised:  as they were not wearing seatbelts.
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Original:  He immediately notified security, and local police were soon called to the scene.
Revised:  The man immediately notified security, and local police were soon called to the scene.
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Original:  From there, the the bag's contents were tested, and the results came back positive for cocaine.
Revised:  From there, the bag's contents were tested, and the results came back positive for cocaine.
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Original:  Beutel concluded his statement by reaffirming NASA's "zero-tolerance" policy for controlled substances, "People know how serious this is  and how serious people take it," Beutel said.
Revised:  Beutel concluded his statement by reaffirming NASA's "zero-tolerance" policy for controlled substances, "People know how serious this is , and how serious people take it," Beutel said.
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Original:   Many members of Mongolia's opposition-led parliament favor harsh punishments for criminals, and the Elbegdorj must gain approval from parliament before the death penalty can be abolished.
Revised:  Many members of Mongolia's opposition-led parliament favor harsh punishments for criminals, and Elbegdorj must gain approval from parliament before the death penalty can be abolished.
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Original: References Al Jazeera English: Mongolia moratorium on executions.
Revised:  Al Jazeera English: Mongolia moratorium on executions.
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Original:  The decision was controversial: when Elbegdorj finished his speech, representatives of the Mongolian People's Revolutionary Party refused to join in the applause, which is customary after a presidential adress to parliament.
Revised:  The decision was controversial: when Elbegdorj finished his speech, representatives of the Mongolian People's Revolutionary Party refused to join in the applause, which is customary after a presidential address to parliament.
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Original:  Rights groups welcomed the move, and Amnesty International expressed hopes that Mongolia will vote in favor of an upcoming United Nations resolution calling for an end to Capital punishment.
Revised:  Human rights groups welcomed the move, and Amnesty International expressed hopes that Mongolia will vote in favor of an upcoming United Nations resolution calling for an end to Capital punishment.
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Original:  Rights groups welcomed the move, and Amnesty International expressed hopes that Mongolia will vote in favor of an upcoming United Nations resolution calling for an end to Capital punishment.
Revised:  Rights groups welcomed the move, with Amnesty International expressing hope that Mongolia will vote in favor of an upcoming United Nations resolution calling for an end to Capital punishment.
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Original:  Rights groups welcomed the move, and Amnesty International expressed hopes that Mongolia will vote in favor of an upcoming United Nations resolution calling for an end to Capital punishment.
Revised:  Rights groups welcomed the move, and Amnesty International expressed hopes that Mongolia will vote in favour of an upcoming United Nations resolution calling for an end to Capital punishment.
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Original:  Many members of Mongolia's opposition-led parliament favor harsh punishments for criminals, and Elbegdorj must gain approval from parliament before the death penalty can be abolished.
Revised:  Many members of Mongolia's opposition-led parliament favour harsh punishments for criminals, and Elbegdorj must gain approval from parliament before the death penalty can be abolished.
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Original:  If Elbegdorj fails to be re-elected after his fourth-term year , the new president could end the moratorium, and executions could resume . Reference
Revised:  If Elbegdorj fails to be re-elected , the new president could end the moratorium, and executions could resume . Reference
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Original:  If Elbegdorj fails to be re-elected after his fourth-term year , the new president could end the moratorium, and executions could resume . Reference
Revised:  If Elbegdorj fails to be re-elected after his fourth-term year , the new president could end the moratorium, and executions could resume Reference
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Original:  If Elbegdorj fails to be re-elected after his fourth-term year , the new president could end the moratorium, and executions could resume . Reference
Revised:  If Elbegdorj fails to be re-elected after his fourth-term year , the new president could end the moratorium, and executions could resume . 
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Original: American televangelist , Pat Robertson , also made remarks on Thursday considered to be inflammatory when he suggested on his television show that the current situation in Haiti is a direct result of a deal Haitians made with Satan in the late 1700s.
Revised: American televangelist Pat Robertson also made remarks on Thursday considered to be inflammatory when he suggested on his television show that the current situation in Haiti is a direct result of a deal Haitians made with Satan in the late 1700s.
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Original:  When asked about these two statements during his press briefing Thursday, White House Press Secretary , Robert Gibbs replied to them both respectively, "In times of great crisis, there are always people that say really stupid things.
Revised:  When asked about these two statements during his press briefing Thursday, White House Press Secretary Robert Gibbs replied to them both respectively, "In times of great crisis, there are always people that say really stupid things.
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Original: Chris Roslan, spokesperson for the network that broadcasts Robertson  show defended the remarks stating, "Dr. Robertson never stated that the earthquake was God's wrath.
Revised: Chris Roslan, spokesperson for the network that broadcasts Robertson 's show defended the remarks stating, "Dr. Robertson never stated that the earthquake was God's wrath.
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Original:  Would you trust that your name is going to instead end up on a mailing list for the Obama people to start asking you for campaign donations for him and other causes?"  " Besides, " Limbaugh added, "We've already donatedto Haiti.
Revised:  Would you trust that your name is going to instead end up on a mailing list for the Obama people to start asking you for campaign donations for him and other causes?" " believe " Limbaugh added, "We've already donatedto Haiti.
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Original: It must be painful to be a liberal, knowing that the foundation of what they " believe " is all built upon lies and socialism. 
Revised: It must be painful to be a liberal, knowing that the foundation of what they " Besides, " is all built upon lies and socialism. 
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Original: American radio host and conservative political commentator Rush Limbaugh is drawing fire for controversial comments he made Thursday criticizing the international relief efforts on behalf of the people of Haiti following Tuesday's earthquake there.
Revised: American radio host and conservative political commentator Rush Limbaugh is drawing fire for controversial comments he made Thursday criticizing the relief efforts on behalf of the people of Haiti following Tuesday's earthquake there.
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