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Original:  They caused extensive damages to the passenger lounges and the bars , and a crewmember was injured , while they responded to the crew’s pleas with cursing.
Revised:  They caused extensive damage to the passenger lounges and the bars , and a crewmember was injured , while they responded to the crew’s pleas with cursing.
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Original:  They caused extensive damages to the passenger lounges and the bars , and a crewmember was injured , while they responded to the crew’s pleas with cursing.
Revised:  They caused extensive damages to the passenger lounges and the bars , while they responded to the crew’s pleas with cursing.
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Original:  Nobel Peace Prize winner activist Aung San Suu Kyi won an estimated 99\% votes in the Kawhmu constituency in Myanmar's parliamentary elections on 1st April, 2012.
Revised: thumb Nobel Peace Prize winner activist Aung San Suu Kyi won an estimated 99\% votes in the Kawhmu constituency in Myanmar's parliamentary elections on 1st April, 2012.
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Original: Unofficially her party NLD claimed victory in 13 constituencies across the country but official tallies are yet to be released.
Revised: Unofficially the NLD claimed victory in 13 constituencies across the country but official tallies are yet to be released.
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Original: Unofficially her party NLD claimed victory in 13 constituencies across the country but official tallies are yet to be released.
Revised: Unofficially her party NLD claimed victory in thirteen constituencies across the country but official tallies are yet to be released.
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Original:  The victory of Suu Kyi marks a remarkable shift in the pro-democracy movement for a country that has been under military rule for the past 49 years.
Revised:  Myanmar has been under military rule for the past 49 years.
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Original:  NLD claimed it was on its way to win 44  seats in the by-elections out of 45.
Revised:  NLD claimed it was on its way to win 44 seats in the by-elections .
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Original:  Widespread incidents of irregularities were reported during polling against which NLD spokesman Nyan Win said he would write to the Union Election Commission.
Revised:  Widespread incidents of irregularities were reported during polling against which NLD spokesman Nyan Win said he would write to the .
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Original:  Known as The Lady, Suu Kyi is the daughter of an independence fighter Aung San . Her supporters waited in crowds for hours just to get a glimpse of her as she campaigned for her first ever elections
Revised:  Known as The Lady, Suu Kyi is the daughter of independence fighter . Her supporters waited in crowds for hours just to get a glimpse of her as she campaigned for her first ever elections
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Original: The leader of , she was a political prisoner for the past 22 years under rule  .
Revised: The leader of , she spent much of the past 22 years under rule .
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Original: The leader of , she was a political prisoner for the past 22 years under rule  .
Revised: The leader of , she was a political prisoner for the past 22 years under rule as a political prisoner .
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Original:  The victory claim was displayed by her party on a digital signboard in . Although Suu Kyi had threatened to boycott the elections earlier fearing they were not fair and transparent , the 66 year old eventually contested Kawhmu, a rural constituency located two hours from Yangon.
Revised:  The victory claim was displayed by her party on a digital signboard in . Although Suu Kyi expressed concern at the election's fairness , the 66 year old eventually contested Kawhmu, a rural constituency located two hours from Yangon.
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Original:  Some of the nearly 700 sticks of dytnamite that was stolen from Gold Mountain Mine Company in Big Bear City, California on May 3, has been returned to a fire department in Riverside, California.
Revised:  Some of the nearly 700 sticks of dynamite that were stolen from Gold Mountain Mine Company in Big Bear City, California on May 3, has been returned to a fire department in Riverside, California.
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Original: The American newspaper USA Today reported on Thursday that the United States' National Security Agency  collected millions of call logs from telecommunication companies in 2001.
Revised:  American newspaper USA Today reported on Thursday that the United States' National Security Agency collected millions of call logs from telecommunication companies in 2001.
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Original: The American newspaper USA Today reported on Thursday that the United States' National Security Agency  collected millions of call logs from telecommunication companies in 2001.
Revised: The American newspaper USA Today reported on Thursday that the United States' National Security Agency (NSA) collected millions of call logs from telecommunication companies in 2001.
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Original: The American newspaper USA Today reported on Thursday that the United States' National Security Agency  collected millions of call logs from telecommunication companies in 2001.
Revised: The American newspaper USA Today reported on Thursday that the United States' National Security Agency collected millions of call logs from telecommunications companies in 2001.
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Original:  The report comes almost four months following a previous controversy of the agency, which included the monitoring of International calls placed within the United States.
Revised:  The report comes almost four months after a previous NSA controversy involving the monitoring of international calls placed within the United States.
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Original:  Congressional members called for answers from the government about the report detailing the agency collecting records of American phone calls from communication companies .
Revised:  Members of Congress called for answers from the government about the report detailing the agency collecting records of American phone calls from communication companies .
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Original:  Congressional members called for answers from the government about the report detailing the agency collecting records of American phone calls from communication companies .
Revised:  Congressional members called for answers from the government about the report detailing the agency collecting records of American phone calls .
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Original:  The top ranking Democrat on the Senate Judiciary Committee said that he was very shocked about the NSA revelation.
Revised:  The top-ranking Democrat on the Senate Judiciary Committee said that he was very shocked about the NSA revelation.
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Original:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunication companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA program shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to a report published in Thursday's edition of the USA Today  . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating  the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
Revised:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunications companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA program shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to a report published in Thursday's edition of the USA Today . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
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Original:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunication companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA program shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to a report published in Thursday's edition of the USA Today  . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating  the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
Revised:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunication companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to a report published in Thursday's edition of the USA Today . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
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Original:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunication companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA program shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to a report published in Thursday's edition of the USA Today  . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating  the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
Revised:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunication companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA program shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to the USA Today . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
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Original:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunication companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA program shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to a report published in Thursday's edition of the USA Today  . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating  the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
Revised:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunication companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA program shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to a report published in Thursday's edition of the USA Today report . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
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Original:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunication companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA program shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to a report published in Thursday's edition of the USA Today  . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating  the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
Revised:  AT&T, Verizon Communications, and BellSouth, three major telecommunication companies in the United States, began releasing logs of millions of phone calls to the NSA program shortly after the September 11, 2001 attacks, according to a report published in Thursday's edition of the USA Today . Earlier this year, the New York Times released a report stating that the NSA had been monitoring certain phone calls placed between the United States and other countries.
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Original:  Instead, information of who placed and received the calls was recorded.
Revised:  The identities of those who placed and received the calls was recorded.
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Original:  Instead, information of who placed and received the calls was recorded.
Revised:  Instead, information of who placed and received the calls were recorded.
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Original:  China lifted its three-day block on 16 of the country's Twitter-like services, including the two largest services Sina's Weibo and Tencent's QQ microblogging sites.
Revised:  lifted its three-day block on 16 of the country's Twitter-like services, including the two largest services Sina's Weibo and Tencent's QQ microblogging sites.
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Original:  China lifted its three-day block on 16 of the country's Twitter-like services, including the two largest services Sina's Weibo and Tencent's QQ microblogging sites.
Revised:  China lifted its three-day block on 16 of the country's services, including the two largest services Sina's Weibo and Tencent's QQ microblogging sites.
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Original:  China lifted its three-day block on 16 of the country's Twitter-like services, including the two largest services Sina's Weibo and Tencent's QQ microblogging sites.
Revised:  China lifted its three-day block on 16 of the country's Twitter-like services, including the two largest services and sites.
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Original:  China said it carried out the ban on the sites' commenting function because microbloggers were using the sites to spread conspiracy theories and rumors involving the disappearance of politican Bo Xilai on March 15.
Revised:  China said it carried out the ban on the sites' commenting function because microbloggers were using the sites to spread conspiracy theories and rumors involving the disappearance of politican on March 15.
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Original:  Bo was once mayor of Dalia , the party chief of Chongqing , and was thought to be a likely candidate for the China's elite Politburo Standing Committee .
Revised:  Bo was once mayor of Dalia , the party chief of , and was thought to be a likely candidate for the China's elite Politburo Standing Committee .
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Original:  Bo was once mayor of Dalia , the party chief of Chongqing , and was thought to be a likely candidate for the China's elite Politburo Standing Committee .
Revised:  Bo was once mayor of Dalia , the party chief of Chongqing , and was thought to be a likely candidate for the China's elite .
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Original:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, Wang Lijun , had also been reported missing after having attempted to seek asylum in the United States through a consulate.
Revised:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, w|Wang Lijun , had also been reported missing after having attempted to seek asylum in the United States through a consulate.
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Original:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, w|Wang Lijun , had also been reported missing after having attempted to seek asylum in the United States through a consulate.
Revised:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, Wang Lijun , had also been reported missing after having attempted to seek asylum in the United States through a consulate.
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Original:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, w|Wang Lijun , had also been reported missing after having attempted to seek asylum in the United States through a consulate.
Revised:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, w|Wang Lijun , had also been reported missing after having attempted to seek asylum in the w|United States|| through a consulate.
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Original:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, Wang Lijun, had also been reported missing after having attempted to seek asylum in the w|United States|| through a consulate.
Revised:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, Wang Lijun, had also been reported missing after having attempted to seek asylum in the through a consulate.
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Original:  China said it carried out the ban on the sites' commenting function because microbloggers were using the sites to spread conspiracy theories and rumors involving the disappearance of politican on March 15.
Revised:  China said it carried out the ban on the sites' commenting function because microbloggers were using the sites to spread conspiracy theories and rumors about the disappearance of politican on March 15.
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Original:  Bo was once mayor of Dalia, the party chief of , and was thought to be a likely candidate for the China's elite .
Revised:  Bo was once mayor of Dalia, the party chief of , and thought to be a likely candidate for the China's elite .
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Original:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, Wang Lijun, had also been reported missing after having attempted to seek asylum in the through a consulate.
Revised:  Bo vanished a short time after his former chief of police, Wang Lijun, had also been reported missing after he attempted to seek asylum in the through a consulate.
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Original:  The block was not the only fallout from the incident as six people were taken into custody for fabrication and others were brought in for questioning  
Revised:  The block was not the only fallout from the incident as six people were taken into custody for fabrication and others were brought in for questioning . 
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Original: Bo Xilai is a former mayor and serves as party chief of Congqing. lifted its three-day block on 16 of the country's services, including the two largest, which are and sites.
Revised: China lifted its three-day block on 16 of the country's services, including the two largest, which are and sites.
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Original:  R. Olesz, B. Pirr and R.
Revised:  R. Olesz, B. Pirri, and again R.
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Original:  Olesz scored for Rockford in regular time, and B. Kearns, M. Repik  and J. Matsumoto scored for San Antonio.
Revised:  Olesz scored for Rockford in regular time, and B. Kearns, M. Repik , and J. Matsumoto scored for San Antonio.
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Original:  R. Olesz, B. Pirri, and again R.
Revised:  Rostislav Olesz, Brandon Pirri, and again R.
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Original:  R. Olesz, B. Pirri, and again R.
Revised:  R. Olesz, B. Pirri, and again 
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Original:  Olesz scored for Rockford in regular time, and B. Kearns, M. Repik, and J. Matsumoto scored for San Antonio.
Revised:  Olesz scored for Rockford in regular time, and Bracken Kearns, Michal Repik, and J. Matsumoto scored for San Antonio.
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Original:  Olesz scored for Rockford in regular time, and B. Kearns, M. Repik, and J. Matsumoto scored for San Antonio.
Revised:  Olesz scored for Rockford in regular time, and B. Kearns, M. Repik, and Jon Matsumoto scored for San Antonio.
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Original: In last night's game at the in , Rockford won 2–1 in shootout win after ending regular time with a score of tied at one in a game similar the previous nights . Scoring shootout goals for Rockford were Broadhurst and Pirri.
Revised: In last night's game at the in , Rockford won 2–1 in shootout win after ending regular time with a score of tied at one in a game similar the previous night's . Scoring shootout goals for Rockford were Broadhurst and Pirri.
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Original:  These rowers include Brodie Buckland, James Marburg , Fergus Pragnell, Duncan Free and Tom Larkins.
Revised:  These rowers include , , Fergus Pragnell, Duncan Free and Tom Larkins.
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Original:  The national team will have a Sydney training camp from May 8 to 12, before departing for Switzerland on May 15th . 2012 Olympics and Paralympics Team Men’s Single Scull Jared Bidwell (QLD)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Men’s Double Scull Scott Brennan (TAS)
Revised:  The national team will have a Sydney training camp from May 8 to 12, before departing for Switzerland on May 15th 2012 Olympics and Paralympics Team Men’s Single Scull Jared Bidwell (QLD)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Men’s Double Scull Scott Brennan (TAS)
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Original:  The national team will have a Sydney training camp from May 8 to 12, before departing for Switzerland on May 15th . 2012 Olympics and Paralympics Team Men’s Single Scull Jared Bidwell (QLD)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Men’s Double Scull Scott Brennan (TAS)
Revised:  The national team will have a Sydney training camp from May 8 to 12, before departing for Switzerland on May 15th . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Men’s Double Scull Scott Brennan (TAS)
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Original:  Women’s Quad Scull Kerry Hore (TAS) Pippa Savage (QLD) Pauline Frasca (VIC) Dana Faletic (TAS)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Men’s Lightweight Double Scull Tom Gibson (TAS) Rod Chisholm (NSW) Women’s Lightweight Double Scull Bronwen Watson (NSW) Hannah Every-Hall (QLD)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Men’s Coxless Pair (Squad) Brodie Buckland (NSW) James Marburg (VIC) Duncan Free (QLD) Fergus Pragnell (NSW) Tom Larkins (VIC) 5 rowers will be cut down to 2 prior to the Lucrene qualifiers.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Men’s Lightweight Double Scull Tom Gibson (TAS) Rod Chisholm (NSW) Women’s Lightweight Double Scull Bronwen Watson (NSW) Hannah Every-Hall (QLD)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Men’s Coxless Pair (Squad) Brodie Buckland (NSW) James Marburg (VIC) Duncan Free (QLD) Fergus Pragnell (NSW) Tom Larkins (VIC) 5 rowers will be cut down to 2 prior to the Lucrene qualifiers.
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Original:  Cameron McKenzie-McHarg (VIC) Francis Hegerty (NSW) Sam Loch (NSW) Toby Lister (NSW) Women’s Coxless Pair Kate Hornsey (TAS) Sarah Tait (VIC)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Women’s Coxed Eight (Squad) Phoebe Stanley (VIC) Hannah Vermeersch (WA) Alexandra Hagan (WA) Sally Kehoe (QLD) Tess Gerrand (NSW) Renee Chatterton (SA) Emma McCarthy (QLD) Sarah Cook (NSW) Amy Clay (NSW) Robyn Selby Smith (VIC) Lizzy Patrick (VIC) 10 rowers will be cut down to 8 prior to the Lucrene qualifiers.
Revised:  Cameron McKenzie-McHarg (VIC) Francis Hegerty (NSW) Sam Loch (NSW) Toby Lister (NSW) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Women’s Coxed Eight (Squad) Phoebe Stanley (VIC) Hannah Vermeersch (WA) Alexandra Hagan (WA) Sally Kehoe (QLD) Tess Gerrand (NSW) Renee Chatterton (SA) Emma McCarthy (QLD) Sarah Cook (NSW) Amy Clay (NSW) Robyn Selby Smith (VIC) Lizzy Patrick (VIC) 10 rowers will be cut down to 8 prior to the Lucrene qualifiers.
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Original:  Men’s Lightweight Coxless Four Todd Skipworth (WA) Ben Cureton (WA) Sam Beltz (TAS) Anthony Edwards (TAS)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Arms Only Men’s Single Scull Erik Horrie (QLD) Trunk and Arms Double Scull (Squad) Kathryn Ross (VIC) John Maclean (NSW) Gavin Bellis (VIC
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Arms Only Men’s Single Scull Erik Horrie (QLD) Trunk and Arms Double Scull (Squad) Kathryn Ross (VIC) John Maclean (NSW) Gavin Bellis (VIC
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Original:  Selection for a team is considered a major boon for women's rowing as Australia had not been competing internationally in the event after a disappointing performance at the 2008 Games in Beijing, where Australia finished well out of medal range in last, and has yet to live down the " Lay Down Sally " situation at the 2004 Games.
Revised:  Selection for a team is considered a major boon for women's rowing as Australia had not been competing internationally in the event after a disappointing performance at the 2008 Games in Beijing, where Australia finished well out of medal range in last, and has yet to live down the " " situation at the 2004 Games.
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Original: It is believed that in two seperate incidents, optical fibre cables were cut at Gundagai and Narrandera in Southern NSW. In addition to the loss of the triple-0 service, 34 mobile base stations in the region have also been affected.
Revised: It is believed that in two separate incidents, optical fibre cables were cut at Gundagai and Narrandera in Southern NSW. In addition to the loss of the triple-0 service, 34 mobile base stations in the region have also been affected.
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Original: Genieve Blackwell has become the third woman Anglican bishop in Australia and the 31st in the world.
Revised:  has become the third woman Anglican bishop in Australia and the 31st in the world.
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Original: Genieve Blackwell has become the third woman Anglican bishop in Australia and the 31st in the world.
Revised: Genieve Blackwell has become the third woman bishop in and the 31st in the world.
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