wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  They reported that both the thickness and the height was "considerably less" than in the advertisement.
Revised:  They reported that both the thickness and the height were "considerably less" than in the advertisement.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Temperatures in Queensland and Western Australia are set to soar well above the average, with heavy  torrential springtime rains arriving well in advance, and is expected to have both negative and positive effects on the agricultural industries of the states.
Revised:  Temperatures in Queensland and Western Australia are predicted to soar well above the average, with heavy torrential springtime rains arriving well in advance, and is expected to have both negative and positive effects on the agricultural industries of the states.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Temperatures in Queensland and Western Australia are set to soar well above the average, with heavy  torrential springtime rains arriving well in advance, and is expected to have both negative and positive effects on the agricultural industries of the states.
Revised:  Temperatures in Queensland and Western Australia are set to soar well above the average, with heavy , torrential springtime rains arriving well in advance, and is expected to have both negative and positive effects on the agricultural industries of the states.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: The south of Australia is similarly due for warmer-than-average conditions with Victoria, South Australia and southern Western Australia set to experience balmy to humid weather.
Revised: The south of Australia is similarly anticipating warmer-than-average conditions with Victoria, South Australia and southern Western Australia set to experience balmy to humid weather.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: The south of Australia is similarly due for warmer-than-average conditions with Victoria, South Australia and southern Western Australia set to experience balmy to humid weather.
Revised: The south of Australia is similarly due for warmer-than-average conditions with Victoria, South Australia and southern Western Australia anticipating balmy to humid weather.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  This comes in contrast to  New South Wales, which experienced its coldest night on record while Melbourne, Victoria dealt with its coldest morning in 15 months.
Revised:  This comes in contrast to parts of New South Wales, which experienced its coldest night on record while Melbourne, Victoria dealt with its coldest morning in 15 months.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  This comes in contrast to parts of New South Wales, which experienced its coldest night on record  while Melbourne, Victoria dealt with its coldest morning in 15 months.
Revised:  This comes in contrast to parts of New South Wales, which experienced their coldest night on record while Melbourne, Victoria dealt with its coldest morning in 15 months.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  This comes in contrast to parts of New South Wales, which experienced its coldest night on record  while Melbourne, Victoria dealt with its coldest morning in 15 months.
Revised:  This comes in contrast to parts of New South Wales, which experienced its coldest night on record , while Melbourne, Victoria dealt with its coldest morning in 15 months.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  After some time Delta Spokesperson Anthony Black told The Associated Press that the 160 passengers on board would be put on a future flight to Portland
Revised:  After some time Delta Spokesperson Anthony Black told the Associated Press that the 160 passengers on board would be put on a future flight to Portland
Edit intent: fluency
Original: File photo of a Delta Airlines Boeing 737-800 A Delta Air Lines flight 1457 departing from Atlanta made an emergency landing after it blew out a tire during take-off.
Revised: File photo of a Delta Airlines Boeing 737-800 Delta Air Lines flight 1457 departing from Atlanta made an emergency landing after it blew out a tire during take-off.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The five killed included four children and their mother 33-year-old Leisha Jones  . Neighbors said that the fire began at approximatively 4 a.m. local time (0800 UTC).
Revised:  The five killed are 33-year-old Leisha Jones . Neighbors said that the fire began at approximatively 4 a.m. local time (0800 UTC).
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The five killed included four children and their mother 33-year-old Leisha Jones  . Neighbors said that the fire began at approximatively 4 a.m. local time (0800 UTC).
Revised:  The five killed included four children and their mother 33-year-old Leisha Jones . Neighbors said that the fire began at approximately 4 a.m. local time (0800 UTC).
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Once flames were doused with water, Fire Lieutenant Robert Strafer , entered the building and found the youngest child, two-year-old Jermaine Sinclair.
Revised:  Once flames were doused with water, Fire Lieutenant Robert Strafer entered the building and found the youngest child, two-year-old Jermaine Sinclair.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Jones mother, Martha Anderson, told the New York Daily News, "She was such a nice person and she was a really good mother," and "She loved her kids ... and I loved her.
Revised:  Jones mother, Martha Anderson, told the New York Daily News, "She was such a nice person and she was a really good mother," adding, "She loved her kids ... and I loved her.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Judges from the United Nations International Court of Justice ruled Thursday that Kosovo's declaration of independence from Serbia in 2008 was not in violation of international law.
Revised: Judges from the United Nations ruled Thursday that Kosovo's declaration of independence from Serbia in 2008 was not in violation of international law.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Kosovo's president, Fatmir Sejdiu , said that "[t]he decision finally removes all doubts that countries which still do not recognise the republic of Kosovo could have," while Serbian president Boris Tadic said that "Serbia will never recognise the unilaterally proclaimed independence of Kosovo.  
Revised:  Kosovo's president, , said that "[t]he decision finally removes all doubts that countries which still do not recognise the republic of Kosovo could have," while Serbian president Boris Tadic said that "Serbia will never recognise the unilaterally proclaimed independence of Kosovo. 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Kosovo's president, Fatmir Sejdiu , said that "[t]he decision finally removes all doubts that countries which still do not recognise the republic of Kosovo could have," while Serbian president Boris Tadic said that "Serbia will never recognise the unilaterally proclaimed independence of Kosovo.  
Revised:  Kosovo's president, Fatmir Sejdiu , said that "[t]he decision finally removes all doubts that countries which still do not recognise the republic of Kosovo could have," while Serbian president said that "Serbia will never recognise the unilaterally proclaimed independence of Kosovo. 
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Kosovo's president, Fatmir Sejdiu , said that "[t]he decision finally removes all doubts that countries which still do not recognise the republic of Kosovo could have," while Serbian president Boris Tadic said that "Serbia will never recognise the unilaterally proclaimed independence of Kosovo.  
Revised:  Kosovo's president, Fatmir Sejdiu , said that "[t]he decision finally removes all doubts that countries which still do not recognise the republic of Kosovo could have," while Serbian president Boris Tadic said that "Serbia will never recognise the unilaterally proclaimed independence of Kosovo. " 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Two people are dead and thousands of others lost their homes in the wake of Typhoon Chanthu.
Revised:  Two people are dead and thousands of others lost their homes in southern China after Typhoon Chanthu.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  An independent candidate for the Wisconsin state legislature was prevented from using the words "NOT the white man's bitch" to describe herself on the ballot.
Revised: The Wisconsin State Capitol An independent candidate for the Wisconsin state legislature was prevented from using the words "NOT the white man's bitch" to describe herself on the ballot.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The decision came from the state's Government Accountability Board  , which upheld a staff recommendation that deemed the wording "pejorative" and therefore in violation of Wisconsin statutes .
Revised:  The decision came from the state's Government Accountability Board (GAB) , which upheld a staff recommendation that deemed the wording "pejorative" and therefore in violation of Wisconsin statutes .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The decision came from the state's Government Accountability Board  , which upheld a staff recommendation that deemed the wording "pejorative" and therefore in violation of Wisconsin statutes .
Revised:  The decision came from the state's Government Accountability Board , which upheld a staff recommendation that deemed the wording "pejorative" .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Gordon Myse, the GAB's chairman, was one of Griffin's supporters . "Isn't she saying, 'I'm not under the white man's direction?
Revised:  Gordon Myse, the GAB's chairman, supported Griffin's supporters . "Isn't she saying, 'I'm not under the white man's direction?
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Gordon Myse, the GAB's chairman, was one of Griffin's supporters . "Isn't she saying, 'I'm not under the white man's direction?
Revised:  Gordon Myse, the GAB's chairman, was one of Griffin's request . "Isn't she saying, 'I'm not under the white man's direction?
Edit intent: clarity
Original: The Wisconsin State Capitol An independent candidate for the Wisconsin state legislature was prevented from using the words "NOT the white man's bitch" to describe herself on the ballot.
Revised: The Wisconsin State Capitol An independent candidate for the Wisconsin state legislature is prevented from using the words "NOT the white man's bitch" to describe herself on the ballot.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The Musashi was a Japanese warship sunk by US forces during World War Two   
Revised:  The Musashi was a Japanese battleship sunk by US forces during World War Two 
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The Musashi was a Japanese warship sunk by US forces during World War Two   
Revised:  The Musashi was a Japanese warship sunk by US forces during World War Two . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Musashi fired into the water, creating large geysers to knock incomer bombers out of the sky.
Revised:  Musashi fired into the water, creating large geysers to knock incoming bombers out of the sky.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Eighteen planes were downed   
Revised:  Eighteen planes were downed . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Eighteen planes were downed   
Revised:  Eighteen planes were downed If confirmed, the find completes Allen's eight-year search for the Musashi. Following seabed mapping the wreck was found using an ROV. One of the world's richest people, Allen has invested much of his fortune in marine exploration and began his quest to find the Musashi out of a lifelong interest in the war
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Well-armed with 18-inch guns, the 263m (862ft ) ship struggled to defend itself against waves of aircraft launched from a US carrier.
Revised:  Well-armed with 18-inch guns, the 263 (862 ) ship struggled to defend itself against waves of aircraft launched from a US carrier.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Musashi boasted a 22-mile reach with its nine guns, and seven aircraft.
Revised:  Musashi boasted a 22- reach with its nine guns, and seven aircraft.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  One of the world's richest people, Allen has  invested much of his fortune in marine exploration and began his quest to find the Musashi out of a lifelong interest in the war
Revised:  One of the world's richest people, Allen has reportedly invested much of his fortune in marine exploration and began his quest to find the Musashi out of a lifelong interest in the war
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  One of the world's richest people, Allen has  invested much of his fortune in marine exploration and began his quest to find the Musashi out of a lifelong interest in the war
Revised:  One of the world's richest people, Allen has invested much of his wealth in marine exploration and began his quest to find the Musashi out of a lifelong interest in the war
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Well-armed with 18-inch guns, the 263 (862) ship struggled to defend itself against waves of aircraft launched from a US carrier . Musashi fired into the water, creating large geysers to knock incoming bombers out of the sky.
Revised:  Well-armed with 18-inch guns, the 263 (862) ship struggled to defend itself against waves of aircraft launched from US carriers . Musashi fired into the water, creating large geysers to knock incoming bombers out of the sky.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Musashi boasted a 22- reach with its nine 18-inch guns, and seven aircraft.
Revised:  Musashi boasted a 22- reach with its nine main guns, and seven aircraft.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Upon arriving at the scene,  police officers observed a man trying to enter an apartment through a window.
Revised:  After arriving at the scene, police officers observed a man trying to enter an apartment through a window.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The 36-year-old suspect and Edwards , 31 , were taken to Oakwood Hospital in Dearborn, where Edwards was pronounced dead.
Revised:  The 36-year-old suspect and Edwards , were taken to Oakwood Hospital in Dearborn, where Edwards was pronounced dead.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: After arriving at the scene, Taylor Police Department say that two of their officers observed a man trying to enter an apartment through a window.
Revised: After arriving at the scene, Taylor Police Department says that two of their officers observed a man trying to enter an apartment through a window.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  " "I heard the shots.
Revised:  "I heard the shots.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The suspect , whose name has not yet been released, underwent surgery, and is reported to have non-life threatening injuries.
Revised:  The suspect underwent surgery, and is reported to have non-life threatening injuries.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Matthew Edwards, a five-year veteran of the Taylor Police Department, is survived by his wife Shannon and two children , Luke, 8, and Moriah, 6. Before returning to his hometown of Taylor in January 2005, Edwards was with the Detroit Police Department.
Revised: Matthew Edwards, a five-year veteran of the Taylor Police Department, is survived by his wife and two children , Luke, 8, and Moriah, 6. Before returning to his hometown of Taylor in January 2005, Edwards was with the Detroit Police Department.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Matthew Edwards, a five-year veteran of the Taylor Police Department, is survived by his wife Shannon and two children , Luke, 8, and Moriah, 6. Before returning to his hometown of Taylor in January 2005, Edwards was with the Detroit Police Department.
Revised: Matthew Edwards, a five-year veteran of the Taylor Police Department, is survived by his wife Shannon and two children . Before returning to his hometown of Taylor in January 2005, Edwards was with the Detroit Police Department.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Surveillance photo of the robber A man dressed as the Star Wars antagonist Darth Vader robed a bank in Setauket, New York.
Revised: Surveillance photo of the robber A man dressed as the Star Wars antagonist Darth Vader robbed a bank in Setauket, New York.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Also police are looking for an apparent cross dressing robber who stuck up a bank in Long Island
Revised:  Police are also looking for an apparent cross dressing robber who stuck up a bank in Long Island
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Armed with a hand gun  the robber stole an undetermined amount of cash from the Chase bank branch.
Revised:  Armed with a hand gun , the robber stole an undetermined amount of cash from the Chase bank branch.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Police are also looking for an apparent cross dressing robber who stuck up a bank in Long Island  
Revised:  Police are also looking for an apparent cross dressing robber who stuck up a bank in Long Island . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Police are also looking for an apparent cross dressing robber who stuck up a bank in Long Island  
Revised:  Police are also looking for an apparent cross dressing robber who stuck up a bank in Long Island Bla Bla Bl
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Yesterday the New York Police Department arrested a man robbing banks  carrying flowers and potted plants.
Revised:  Yesterday the New York Police Department arrested a man robbing banks , while carrying flowers and potted plants.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He is seen cowering in the background of surveillance photographs.
Revised:  He is seen in the background of surveillance photographs.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He is seen in the background of surveillance photographs.
Revised:  He can be seen in the background of surveillance photographs.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Yesterday the New York Police Department arrested a man robbing banks , while carrying flowers and potted plants.
Revised:  Yesterday the New York Police Department arrested a man who robbed banks while carrying flowers and potted plants.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Police are also looking for an apparent cross dressing robber who stuck up a bank in Long Island
Revised:  Police are also looking for an apparent cross-dressing robber who held up a bank in Long Island
Edit intent: clarity
Original: An 8.0 earthquake struck the region in 1976, generating a tsunami which devastated 700 km of coastline in the Sulu Archipelago and southern Mindanao island.
Revised: An 8.0 earthquake struck the region in 1976, generating a tsunami which devastated 700 kilometers of coastline in the Sulu Archipelago and southern Mindanao island.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  and 915 kilometers south-southeast of the capital Manila USGS reported.
Revised:  and 915 kilometers south-southeast of the capital city Manila, USGS reported.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  An 8.0 earthquake struck the region in 1976, generating a tsunami which devastated 700 kilometers of coastline in the Sulu Archipelago and southern Mindanao island.
Revised: The quake was reported felt in cities such as Zamboanga, and officials "were still determining if there were casualties or damages", Xinhua reported. A resident in the area, Yolly Andrias told Xinhua that "they were still sleeping when the strong quake awoke them." An 8.0 earthquake struck the region in 1976, generating a tsunami which devastated 700 kilometers of coastline in the Sulu Archipelago and southern Mindanao island.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The epicenter of this earthquake was located 102 kilometers southwest of Cotabato , Mindanao;
Revised:  The epicenter of this earthquake was located 102 kilometers southwest of , Mindanao;
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  and 915 kilometers south-southeast of the capital city Manila, USGS reported.
Revised:  and 915 kilometers south-southeast of the capital city , reported.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The quake was reported felt in cities such as Zamboanga , and officials "were still determining if there were casualties or damages", Xinhua reported.
Revised:  The quake was reported felt in cities such as , and officials "were still determining if there were casualties or damages", Xinhua reported.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  An 8.0 earthquake struck the region in 1976, generating a tsunami which devastated 700 kilometers of coastline in the Sulu Archipelago and southern Mindanao island.
Revised:  An struck the region in 1976, generating a tsunami which devastated 700 kilometers of coastline in the Sulu Archipelago and southern Mindanao island.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He has held the title Footballer of the Year in both Scotland and England  
Revised:  He has held the title Footballer of the Year in both Scotland and England . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He won three s, one being a 'Double' won in the same year as the English league, and the with Tottenham Hotspur.
Revised:  He won three s, one being a 'Double' won in the same year as the English league, with Tottenham Hotspur.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Iraq is in a state of turmoil." Paul Kessler of UNHCR has said that kidnappings and other security problems are still common in Northern Iraq.
Revised:  Iraq is in a state of turmoil." 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Despite a warning by the UN High Commission for Refugees that no part of Iraq is now safe, the home office are reported to be sending the men back as soon as 28 August in a military aeroplane.
Revised:  Despite a warning by the UN High Commission for Refugees that no part of Iraq is now safe, the home office are reported to be sending the men back as soon as 28 August in an Iraqi military aeroplane.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  L'Equipe released anonymous lab data with a medical identification , finding banned EPO in five year old samples of cyclist Lance Armstrong's urine, originally taken after he won the 1999 Tour de France.
Revised:  L'Equipe released lab data with a medical identification , finding banned EPO in five year old samples of cyclist Lance Armstrong's urine, originally taken after he won the 1999 Tour de France.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  L'Equipe released anonymous lab data with a medical identification , finding banned EPO in five year old samples of cyclist Lance Armstrong's urine, originally taken after he won the 1999 Tour de France.
Revised:  L'Equipe released anonymous lab data with a medical identification allegedly finding banned EPO in five year old samples of cyclist Lance Armstrong's urine, originally taken after he won the 1999 Tour de France.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Ayotte was surprised that chemical testing of 1999 urine could have been done in 2004 at the French national anti-doping laboratory at Châtenay-Malabry.
Revised:  Ayotte expressed surprise that chemical testing of 1999 urine could have been done in 2004 at the French national anti-doping laboratory at Châtenay-Malabry.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Ayotte does not question whether the new type of analysis is correct , rather she questions the ethics of long-delayed test results.
Revised:  Ayotte does not question whether the new type of analysis is correct ; rather she questions the ethics of long-delayed test results.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  There are normally two samples, "A" and "B".
Revised:  She states that there are normally two samples, "A" and "B".
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The second ethical problem  is that an athlete charged with doping long after the athletic event , has no way to submit to additional testing to disprove an adverse finding.
Revised:  The second ethical problem is that an athlete charged with doping long after the athletic event has no way to submit to additional testing to disprove an adverse finding.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Similar reasoning led to enactment of the statutes of limitations in legal cases, where justice long delayed was too frequently justice denied.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  "It was the only thing that kept me alive," he wrote  
Revised:  "It was the only thing that kept me alive," he wrote . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% French Sports Minister Jean-Francois Lamour said that without the "A" samples, no disciplinary action could be taken against Armstrong.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The second ethical problem, in Ayotte's view, is that an athlete charged with doping long after the athletic event has no way to submit to additional testing to disprove an adverse finding.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Armstrong says: "I will simply restate what I have said many times: I have never taken performance - enhancing drugs."
Revised:  Armstrong says: "I will simply restate what I have said many times: I have never taken performance - 
Edit intent: clarity