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Original:  Sonographers in the UK are educated to a high level, training itself is delivered as a MSc/PGDip/PGCert by the universities and overseen by the Consortium for Accreditation of Sonographic Education (CASE), as training is delivered at post graduate level all sonographers must have a bachelor's degree or equivalent prior to undertaking this specialism, this means training can take a minimum of 4 years.
Revised:  Sonographers in the UK are educated to a high level, training itself is delivered as a MSc/PGDip/PGCert by the universities and overseen by the Consortium for Accreditation of Sonographic Education ; as training is delivered at post graduate level all sonographers must have a bachelor's degree or equivalent prior to undertaking this specialism, this means training can take a minimum of 4 years.
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Original:  Sonographers in the UK are educated to a high level, training itself is delivered as a MSc/PGDip/PGCert by the universities and overseen by the Consortium for Accreditation of Sonographic Education (CASE), as training is delivered at post graduate level all sonographers must have a bachelor's degree or equivalent prior to undertaking this specialism, this means training can take a minimum of 4 years.
Revised:  Sonographers in the UK are educated to a high level, training itself is delivered as a MSc/PGDip/PGCert by the universities and overseen by the Consortium for Accreditation of Sonographic Education (CASE), as training is delivered at postgraduate level, all sonographers must have a bachelor's degree or equivalent prior to undertaking this specialism, this means training can take a minimum of 4 years.
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Original:  Sonographers in the UK are educated to a high level, training itself is delivered as a MSc/PGDip/PGCert by the universities and overseen by the Consortium for Accreditation of Sonographic Education (CASE), as training is delivered at post graduate level all sonographers must have a bachelor's degree or equivalent prior to undertaking this specialism, this means training can take a minimum of 4 years.
Revised:  Sonographers in the UK are educated to a high level, training itself is delivered as a MSc/PGDip/PGCert by the universities and overseen by the Consortium for Accreditation of Sonographic Education (CASE), as training is delivered at post graduate level all sonographers must have a bachelor's degree or equivalent prior to undertaking this specialty, and this means training can take a minimum of 4 years.
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Original:  There is currently no requirement for a sonographer to be state registered in the UK, although the majority are registered with the Health and Care Professions Council (HCPC) as a radiographer.
Revised:  Currently, no requirement exists for a sonographer to be state registered in the UK, although the majority are registered with the Health and Care Professions Council (HCPC) as a radiographer.
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Original:  However  the HCPC has previously sought to require statutory registration of sonographers, a motion supported by a number of professional bodies  and the HCPC was rejected by the Department of Health.
Revised:  However , the HCPC has previously sought to require statutory registration of sonographers, a motion supported by a number of professional bodies and the HCPC was rejected by the Department of Health.
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Original:  However  the HCPC has previously sought to require statutory registration of sonographers, a motion supported by a number of professional bodies  and the HCPC was rejected by the Department of Health.
Revised:  However the HCPC has previously sought to require statutory registration of sonographers, a motion supported by a number of professional bodies , and the HCPC was rejected by the Department of Health.
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Original:  The rationale for this rejection remains controversial however a voluntary register is currently maintained by the College of Radiographers.
Revised:  The rationale for this rejection remains controversial , but a voluntary registry is currently maintained by the College of Radiographers.
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Original:  United States The profession is sub-divided in specialties such as cardiac, obstetrical, vascular, and general sonographers.
Revised:  United States The profession is subdivided in specialties such as cardiac, obstetrical, vascular, and general sonographers.
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Original: Occupational Outlook Handbook, 2010-11 Edition, USA Dept. of Labor, Bureau of Labor Statistics It may take around 1 1/2 years  to get a degree in diagnostic medical sonography.
Revised: Occupational Outlook Handbook, 2010-11 Edition, USA Dept. of Labor, Bureau of Labor Statistics Around 1 1/2 years to get a degree in diagnostic medical sonography.
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Original: Occupational Outlook Handbook, 2010-11 Edition, USA Dept. of Labor, Bureau of Labor Statistics It may take around 1 1/2 years  to get a degree in diagnostic medical sonography.
Revised: Occupational Outlook Handbook, 2010-11 Edition, USA Dept. of Labor, Bureau of Labor Statistics It may take around 1 1/2 years may be needed to get a degree in diagnostic medical sonography.
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Original:  In the United States  the most widely accepted sonographic education is provided by CAAHEP/JRC-DMS accredited programs.
Revised:  In the United States , the most widely accepted sonographic education is provided by CAAHEP/JRC-DMS accredited programs.
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Original:  There are two credentialing bodies in the United States for sonographers , the Cardiovascular Credentialing International (CCI) Established in 1968 and the American Registry for Diagnostic Medical Sonography (ARDMS) Established in 1975.
Revised:  The two credentialing bodies in the United States for sonographers , the Cardiovascular Credentialing International (CCI) Established in 1968 and the American Registry for Diagnostic Medical Sonography (ARDMS) Established in 1975.
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Original:  There are two credentialing bodies in the United States for sonographers , the Cardiovascular Credentialing International (CCI) Established in 1968 and the American Registry for Diagnostic Medical Sonography (ARDMS) Established in 1975.
Revised:  There are two credentialing bodies in the United States for sonographers are the Cardiovascular Credentialing International (CCI) Established in 1968 and the American Registry for Diagnostic Medical Sonography (ARDMS) Established in 1975.
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Original:  There are two credentialing bodies in the United States for sonographers , the Cardiovascular Credentialing International (CCI) Established in 1968 and the American Registry for Diagnostic Medical Sonography (ARDMS) Established in 1975.
Revised:  There are two credentialing bodies in the United States for sonographers , the Cardiovascular Credentialing International established in 1968 and the American Registry for Diagnostic Medical Sonography (ARDMS) Established in 1975.
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Original:  There are two credentialing bodies in the United States for sonographers , the Cardiovascular Credentialing International (CCI) Established in 1968 and the American Registry for Diagnostic Medical Sonography (ARDMS) Established in 1975.
Revised:  There are two credentialing bodies in the United States for sonographers , the Cardiovascular Credentialing International (CCI) Established in 1968 and the American Registry for Diagnostic Medical Sonography (ARDMS) established in 1975.
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Original:  Both CCI and ARDMS have earned the prestigious ANSI-ISO 17024 accreditation for certifying bodies from the International Organization for Standardization (ISO) . Accreditation is granted through the American National Standards Institute (ANSI) . Recognition of ARDMS programs in providing credentials has also earned the ARDMS accreditation with the National Commission for Certifying Agencies (NCCA).
Revised:  Both have earned the prestigious ANSI-ISO 17024 accreditation for certifying bodies from the International Organization for Standardization (ISO) . Accreditation is granted through the American National Standards Institute (ANSI) . Recognition of ARDMS programs in providing credentials has also earned the ARDMS accreditation with the National Commission for Certifying Agencies (NCCA).
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Original:  Both CCI and ARDMS have earned the prestigious ANSI-ISO 17024 accreditation for certifying bodies from the International Organization for Standardization (ISO) . Accreditation is granted through the American National Standards Institute (ANSI) . Recognition of ARDMS programs in providing credentials has also earned the ARDMS accreditation with the National Commission for Certifying Agencies (NCCA).
Revised:  Both CCI and ARDMS have earned the prestigious ANSI-ISO 17024 accreditation for certifying bodies from the International Organization for Standardization . Accreditation is granted through the American National Standards Institute (ANSI) . Recognition of ARDMS programs in providing credentials has also earned the ARDMS accreditation with the National Commission for Certifying Agencies (NCCA).
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Original:  Both CCI and ARDMS have earned the prestigious ANSI-ISO 17024 accreditation for certifying bodies from the International Organization for Standardization (ISO) . Accreditation is granted through the American National Standards Institute (ANSI) . Recognition of ARDMS programs in providing credentials has also earned the ARDMS accreditation with the National Commission for Certifying Agencies (NCCA).
Revised:  Both CCI and ARDMS have earned the prestigious ANSI-ISO 17024 accreditation for certifying bodies from the International Organization for Standardization (ISO) . Accreditation is granted through the American National Standards Institute . Recognition of ARDMS programs in providing credentials has also earned the ARDMS accreditation with the National Commission for Certifying Agencies (NCCA).
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Original:  Work-related injury During their careers, 84\% of sonographers report experiencing some form of work-related musculoskeletal pain due to scanning in compromised positions, incorrect gripping of the transducer, spending too much time manipulating the transducer on technically difficult exams such as obese or large pregnant patients  and a lack of upper body fitness.
Revised:  Work-related injury During their careers, 84\% of sonographers report experiencing some form of work-related musculoskeletal pain due to scanning in compromised positions, incorrect gripping of the transducer, spending too much time manipulating the transducer on technically difficult exams such as obese or large pregnant patients , and a lack of upper body fitness.
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Original:  21 no. 3 234-237Joan P. Baker "The History of Sonographers" JUM January 2005 URL Stretching protocols have been suggested to be a useful tool in reducing risk of musculoskeletal injury, pain  and repetitive strain injury in sonographers
Revised:  21 no. 3 234-237Joan P. Baker "The History of Sonographers" JUM January 2005 URL Stretching protocols have been suggested to be a useful tool in reducing risk of musculoskeletal injury, pain , and repetitive strain injury in sonographers
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Original: JPG|A sonographer performing pediatric echocardiography . ]]
Revised: JPG|A sonographer performing pediatric echocardiography ]]
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Original: A sonographer is a healthcare professional who specialises in the use of ultrasonic imaging devices to produce diagnostic images, scans, videos or three-dimensional volumes of anatomy and diagnostic data, frequently a radiographer, but may be any healthcare professional with the appropriate training.
Revised: A sonographer is a healthcare professional who specialises in the use of ultrasonic imaging devices to produce diagnostic images, videos or three-dimensional volumes of anatomy and diagnostic data, frequently a radiographer, but may be any healthcare professional with the appropriate training.
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Original:  Both have earned the prestigious ANSI-ISO 17024 accreditation for certifying bodies from the International Organization for Standardization.
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Original:  Established in 1977 as a nonprofit organization, NOCA is a leader in setting quality standards for certifying organizations.
Revised:  Established in 1977 as a nonprofit organization, NOCA sets quality standards for certifying organizations.
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Original:  Sonography requires specialised education and skills to acquire, view, analyze , and optimize information in the image.
Revised:  Sonography requires specialised education and skills to acquire, analyze and optimize information in the image.
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Original:  The terms ultrasound technologist and ultrasound technician are deprecated.
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Original: A sonographer is a healthcare professional who specialises in the use of ultrasonic imaging devices to produce diagnostic images, scans, videos or three-dimensional volumes of anatomy and diagnostic data , frequently a radiographer, but may be any healthcare professional with the appropriate training .
Revised: A sonographer is a healthcare professional who specialises in the use of ultrasonic imaging devices to produce diagnostic images, scans, videos or three-dimensional volumes of anatomy and diagnostic data .
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Original: It was the Alan’s from North Ossetia who won against him.
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Original: Land conflicts with the Nogai over the rivers After defending the highlands, the Chechens attacked Mongol control of the lowlands (after both Mongol invasions this occurred).
Revised: Land conflicts with the Nogai over the rivers After defending the highlands, the Chechens attacked Mongol control of the lowlands (after both Mongol invasions had occurred).
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Original:  After that, the Chechen managed to take most (but not all) of their former holdings on the Sunzha, but most of the Terek remained in Kypchak hands.
Revised:  After that, the Chechens managed to take most (but not all) of their former holdings on the Sunzha, but most of the Terek remained in Kypchak hands.
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Original:  Conflicts between Nakhs and Turkic peoples originating from the Mongol invasion when Dzurdzuks were driven out of the Terek and Sunzha rivers by Turco-Mongolian invaders (the Nogais)  continued as late as the 1750s and 1770s.
Revised:  Conflicts between Nakh and Turkic peoples originating from the Mongol invasion when Dzurdzuks were driven out of the Terek and Sunzha rivers by Turco-Mongolian invaders (the Nogais) continued as late as the 1750s and 1770s.
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Original:  Conflicts between Nakhs and Turkic peoples originating from the Mongol invasion when Dzurdzuks were driven out of the Terek and Sunzha rivers by Turco-Mongolian invaders (the Nogais)  continued as late as the 1750s and 1770s.
Revised:  Conflicts between Nakhs and Turkic peoples had originated from the Mongol invasion when Dzurdzuks were driven out of the Terek and Sunzha rivers by Turco-Mongolian invaders (the Nogais) continued as late as the 1750s and 1770s.
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Original:  Conflicts between Nakhs and Turkic peoples originating from the Mongol invasion when Dzurdzuks were driven out of the Terek and Sunzha rivers by Turco-Mongolian invaders (the Nogais)  continued as late as the 1750s and 1770s.
Revised:  Conflicts between Nakhs and Turkic peoples originating from the Mongol invasions when Dzurdzuks were driven out of the Terek and Sunzha rivers by Turco-Mongolian invaders (the Nogais) continued as late as the 1750s and 1770s.
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Original:  Conflicts between Nakhs and Turkic peoples originating from the Mongol invasion when Dzurdzuks were driven out of the Terek and Sunzha rivers by Turco-Mongolian invaders (the Nogais)  continued as late as the 1750s and 1770s.
Revised:  Conflicts between Nakhs and Turkic peoples originating from the Mongol invasion when Dzurdzuks were driven out of the Terek and Sunzha rivers by Turco-Mongolian invaders (the Nogais) and continued as late as the 1750s and 1770s.
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Original: End of the Chechen-Georgian alliance and later replacement As the Georgian-allied state of Dzurdzuketia was destroyed, so was the alliance the Dzurdzuks had with the Georgians - the 13th century saw the end of it.
Revised: End of the Chechen-Georgian alliance and later replacement As the Georgian-allied state of Dzurdzuketia was destroyed, so was the alliance the Dzurdzuks had with the Georgians – the 13th century saw the end of it.
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Original:  The Chechen feudal state of Simsir, after the First Mongol Invasion (  which its monarchy somehow miraculously survived), allied itself not to Georgia, but to the Golden Horde, and even nominally converted to Islam, when faced with the threat of invasion.
Revised:  The Chechen feudal state of Simsir, after the First Mongol Invasion ( during which its monarchy somehow miraculously survived), allied itself not to Georgia, but to the Golden Horde, and even nominally converted to Islam, when faced with the threat of invasion.
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Original:  Page 24 Kypchak Turkic peoples - some of which becoming future affiliates of Genghis Khan - had been invading and settling areas further and further South and West (a process that had was continuing since the fall of the Khazars), including the fertile river valleys of the Terek and the Kuban.
Revised:  Page 24 Kypchak Turkic peoples – some of which becoming future affiliates of Genghis Khan - had been invading and settling areas further and further South and West (a process that had was continuing since the fall of the Khazars), including the fertile river valleys of the Terek and the Kuban.
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Original:  Page 24 Kypchak Turkic peoples - some of which becoming future affiliates of Genghis Khan - had been invading and settling areas further and further South and West (a process that had was continuing since the fall of the Khazars), including the fertile river valleys of the Terek and the Kuban.
Revised:  Page 24 Kypchak Turkic peoples - some of which becoming future affiliates of Genghis Khan – had been invading and settling areas further and further South and West (a process that had was continuing since the fall of the Khazars), including the fertile river valleys of the Terek and the Kuban.
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Original:  Page 24 Kypchak Turkic peoples - some of which becoming future affiliates of Genghis Khan - had been invading and settling areas further and further South and West (a process that had was continuing since the fall of the Khazars), including the fertile river valleys of the Terek and the Kuban.
Revised:  Page 24 Kypchak Turkic peoples - some of which becoming future affiliates of Genghis Khan - had been invading and settling areas further and further South and West (a process that had continued since the fall of the Khazars), including the fertile river valleys of the Terek and the Kuban.
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Original:  The Kingdom of Georgia was traditionally strong ally of Dzurdzuketia, but it was unable to help the Durdzuks when it was under  invasion itself.
Revised:  The Kingdom of Georgia was traditionally strong ally of Dzurdzuketia, but it was unable to help the Durdzuks when it was under the invasion itself.
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Original:  However, this came at great cost to them, and the states they had set up were utterly destroyed as was their previous organized systems.
Revised:  However, this came at great cost to them, and the states they had built were utterly destroyed as was their previous organized systems.
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Original:  However, this came at great cost to them, and the states they had set up were utterly destroyed as was their previous organized systems.
Revised:  However, this came at great cost to them, and the states they had set up were utterly destroyed , as were their previous organized systems.
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Original:  This report has been connected to a Chechen folktale first recorded by I. A. Krasnov in 1967 about an old Hunter called Idig that with his companions  defended a mountain for 12 years against a Mongol-Tatar horde:
Revised:  This report has been connected to a Chechen folktale first recorded by I. A. Krasnov in 1967 about an old hunter called Idig who, with his companions defended a mountain for 12 years against a Mongol-Tatar horde:
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Original:  This report has been connected to a Chechen folktale first recorded by I. A. Krasnov in 1967 about an old Hunter called Idig that with his companions  defended a mountain for 12 years against a Mongol-Tatar horde:
Revised:  This report has been connected to a Chechen folktale first recorded by I. A. Krasnov in 1967 about an old Hunter called Idig that with his companions , defended a mountain for 12 years against a Mongol-Tatar horde:
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Original: OFFICENAMETERMPresidentCarlos Andrés Pérez1974–1979Home AffairsLuis Piñerua Ordáz1974 –
Revised: OFFICENAMETERMPresidentCarlos Andrés Pérez1974–1979Home AffairsLuis Piñerúa Ordaz1974 –
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Original: The First Presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (from 1974 to 1979) coincided with the oil boom of 1974  which saw Venezuela's  explode.
Revised: The First Presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (from 1974 to 1979) coincided with the oil boom of 1974 , which saw Venezuela's explode.
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Original: The First Presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (from 1974 to 1979) coincided with the oil boom of 1974  which saw Venezuela's  explode.
Revised: The First Presidency of Carlos Andrés Pérez (from 1974 to 1979) coincided with the oil boom of 1974 which saw Venezuela's economy explode.
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Original:  Domestic policy Nationalization of Oil, 1 January 1976 One of the most radical aspects of Pérez's program for government was the notion that petroleum oil was a tool for under-developed nations like Venezuela to attain first world status and usher a fairer, more equitable international order.
Revised:  Domestic policy Nationalization of Oil, January 1, 1976 One of the most radical aspects of Pérez's program for government was the notion that petroleum oil was a tool for under-developed nations like Venezuela to attain first world status and usher a fairer, more equitable international order.
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Original:  Drastic increases in petroleum prices that led to an economic bonanza for the country just as Pérez started his term.
Revised:  Drastic increases in petroleum prices led to an economic bonanza for the country just as Pérez started his term.
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Original:  His policies, including the nationalization of the iron and petroleum industries, investment in large state-owned industrial projects for the production of aluminium and hydroelectric energy, infrastructure improvements  and the funding of social welfare and scholarship programmes , were extremely ambitious and involved massive government spending, to the tune of almost $53 billion.
Revised:  His policies, including the nationalization of the iron and petroleum industries, investment in large state-owned industrial projects for the production of aluminium and hydroelectric energy, infrastructure improvements , and the funding of social welfare and scholarship programmes , were extremely ambitious and involved massive government spending, to the tune of almost $53 billion.
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