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Original: Members of the  across party lines urged the Indian government to protect the , one of the most sacred Hindu texts, from a legal ban in  .  followers rallied in front of the  Russian consulate protesting the ban.
Revised: Members of the across party lines urged the Indian government to protect the , one of the most sacred Hindu texts, from a legal ban in Russia . followers rallied in front of the Russian consulate protesting the ban.
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Original:  Wikipedia turns four years old Our sister project, Wikipedia, celebrates its fourth anniversary today.
Revised: Indonesia warns Christian aid workers to help, not to evangelise Indonesian officials are warning religious-based organizations that aid workers traveling to Sumatra should not try to convert Islamic tsunami survivors to other religions. The country is the most-populous Muslim nation in the world. Source: Associated Press Wikipedia turns four years old Our sister project, Wikipedia, celebrates its fourth anniversary today.
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Original: U.S. military documents indicate that the U.S. Army has taken and incarcerated wives of suspected enemy fighters for "leveraging" purposes against their husbands;
Revised: United States military documents indicate that the U.S. Army has taken and incarcerated wives of suspected enemy fighters for "leveraging" purposes against their husbands;
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Original:  The I.O. said he objected, but that when they raided the house a senior sergeant, who was the team leader, seized her anyway.
Revised:  The intelligence officer said he objected, but that when they raided the house a senior sergeant, who was the team leader, seized her anyway.
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Original:  The reply was ;
Revised:  The reply was ,
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Original: Throughout China and the worlds Chinatowns, Dragon dancers danced and fireworks when off to mark the the arrival of the new year.
Revised: Throughout China and the worlds Chinatowns, Dragon dancers danced and fireworks went off to mark the the arrival of the new year.
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Original:  In the Chinese lunar calendar, the Chinese Year of the Dog , ends on Febuary 17, 2007.
Revised:  In the Chinese lunar calendar, the Chinese Year of the Dog ends on Febuary 17, 2007.
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Original:  Making it 385 day long- 13 months.
Revised:  Making it 385 days long, or 13 months.
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Original:  The last time a Chinese year was this long was back in 1944
Revised:  The last time a Chinese year was this long was in 1944
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Original: Millions of people celebrated the arrival of the Chinese Year of the Dog , throughout the world's time zones.
Revised: Millions of people celebrated the arrival of the Chinese Year of the Dog throughout the world's time zones.
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Original:  Throughout China and the worlds Chinatowns, Dragon dancers danced and fireworks went off to mark the arrival of the new year.
Revised:  Throughout China and the world's Chinatowns, Dragon dancers danced and fireworks went off to mark the arrival of the new year.
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Original: The Scandinavian country of Finland has become one of the world's most healthy, according to an investigation by the English newspaper The Guardian.
Revised: The Scandinavian country of Finland was named among the world's most healthy, according to an investigation by the English newspaper The Guardian.
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Original:  When the Finnish government found out the figures in the 1970s, the began a campaign to make a healthier nation.
Revised:  When the Finnish government found out the figures in the 1970s, it began a campaign to make a healthier nation.
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Original:  The number of males dying of heart problems has, over the  35 years, decreased by 65 percent, and lung cancer deaths have also dropped dramatically.
Revised:  The number of males dying of heart problems has, over the past 35 years, decreased by 65 percent, and lung cancer deaths have also dropped dramatically.
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Original:  Other nations are now considering using similar tactics to the Finnish government to make their own countries more healthy, but some say it is yet another example of a  nanny state. 
Revised:  Other nations are now considering using similar tactics as the Finnish government to make their own countries more healthy, but some say it is yet another example of a nanny state. 
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Original:  Other nations are now considering using similar tactics to the Finnish government to make their own countries more healthy, but some say it is yet another example of a  nanny state. 
Revised:  Other nations are now considering using similar tactics to the Finnish government to make their own countries more healthy, but some say it is yet another example of a " nanny state. 
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Original:  Other nations are now considering using similar tactics to the Finnish government to make their own countries more healthy, but some say it is yet another example of a  nanny state. 
Revised:  Other nations are now considering using similar tactics to the Finnish government to make their own countries more healthy, but some say it is yet another example of a nanny state. "
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Original:  According to health experts, Finland is in the bottom two countries for " couch-potatoism " , the other being Canada .
Revised:  According to health experts, Finland joins Canada as having the distinction of being home to the lowest percentage of " couch-potatoism " , the other being Canada .
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Original:  According to health experts, Finland is in the bottom two countries for " couch-potatoism " , the other being Canada .
Revised:  According to health experts, Finland is in the bottom two countries for " couch potato " , the other being Canada .
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Original:  According to health experts, Finland is in the bottom two countries for " couch-potatoism " , the other being Canada .
Revised:  According to health experts, Finland is in the bottom two countries for " couch-potatoism " citizens among developed nations .
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Original:  References This Guardian artic 
Revised:  References This Guardian article 
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Original:  However, no further information has been made available  
Revised:  However, no further information has been made available . 
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Original:  MSNBC reports that Woodruff and Vogt were wearing body armor and helmets when the explosion occurred, measures that may turn out to have saved their lives.  ] 
Revised:  MSNBC reports that Woodruff and Vogt were wearing body armor and helmets when the explosion occurred, measures that may turn out to have saved their lives. The ] 
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Original: Woodruff was medivaced to the Balad Airbase 68 kilometers north of Bagdad and is currently undergoing surgery.
Revised: Woodruff was evacuated to the Balad Airbase 68 kilometers north of Bagdad and is currently undergoing surgery.
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Original:  According to the Committee to Protect Journalists, 61 journalists have been killed in the line of duty in Iraq since the U.S.-led invasion in 2003 
Revised:  According to the Committee to Protect Journalists, 61 journalists have been killed in the line of duty in Iraq since the U.S.-led invasion in 2003. 
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Original:  Trinity Mirror newspapers, which publishes the Mirror  also publishes another tabloid The People which is also alleged to have used phone hacking to get stories.
Revised:  Trinity Mirror newspapers, which publishes the Mirror , also publishes another tabloid The People which is also alleged to have used phone hacking to get stories.
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Original:  Hipwell told the inquiry that he believed that mobile voicemail hacking was "genuinely accepted", "happened every day" and "was entirely accepted by the senior editors on the newspaper" and that "it was seen as a slightly underhand thing to do but not illegal".
Revised:  Hipwell told the inquiry he believed that mobile voicemail hacking was "genuinely accepted", "happened every day" and "was entirely accepted by the senior editors on the newspaper" and that "it was seen as a slightly underhand thing to do but not illegal".
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Original:  The Leveson Inquiry was set up by the British Prime Minister following the scandal which engulfed the following widespread allegations that they hacked into voicemails of crime victims and their families including the murdered schoolgirl  and has so far interviewed numerous representatives of the media industry, and alleged victims of press intrusion and phone hacking.
Revised:  The Leveson Inquiry was set up by the British Prime Minister following the scandal which engulfed the following widespread allegations that they hacked into voicemails of crime victims and their families including the murdered schoolgirl , and has so far interviewed numerous representatives of the media industry, and alleged victims of press intrusion and phone hacking.
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Original: Hipwell told the inquiry he believed that mobile voicemail hacking was "genuinely accepted", "happened every day" and "was entirely accepted by the senior editors on the newspaper" and that "it was seen as a slightly underhand thing to do but not illegal ".
Revised: Hipwell told the inquiry he believed that mobile voicemail hacking was "genuinely accepted", "happened every day" and "was entirely accepted by the senior editors on the newspaper" and that "it was seen as a slightly underhand thing to do but not illegal ."
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Original: Hipwell told the inquiry he believed that mobile voicemail hacking was "genuinely accepted", "happened every day" and "was entirely accepted by the senior editors on the newspaper" and that "it was seen as a slightly underhand thing to do but not illegal."
Revised: Hipwell told the inquiry he believed that voicemail hacking was "genuinely accepted", "happened every day" and "was entirely accepted by the senior editors on the newspaper" and that "it was seen as a slightly underhand thing to do but not illegal."
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Original:  He also stated "that a great number of the Mirror's showbusiness stories would come from that source" and that " showbiz  hacks discussed techniques and products of hacking openly".
Revised:  He also stated "that a great number of the Mirror's showbusiness stories would come from that source" and that " s hacks discussed techniques and products of hacking openly".
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Original: Piers Morgan, former editor of the Daily Mirror James Hipwell, a former financial reporter for the tabloid, told the Leveson Inquiry today that hacking into voicemails of celebrities and others was a "bog-standard tool" for entertainment journalists at the Mirror.
Revised: Piers Morgan, former editor of the Daily Mirror James Hipwell, a former financial reporter for the tabloid, told the Leveson Inquiry today he believed hacking into voicemails of celebrities and others was a "bog-standard tool" for entertainment journalists at the Mirror.
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Original:  Hipwell's testimony contradicts claims by the former editor of the Mirror, , who now hosts a talk show on . Morgan claims that under his editorship, he was unaware of any hacking, but Hipwell claims it is unlikely that Morgan did not know about hacking going on at the paper.
Revised:  Hipwell's testimony contradicts claims by the former editor of the Mirror, , who now hosts a talk show on . Morgan claims that under his editorship, he was unaware of any hacking, but Hipwell claims it is unlikely Morgan did not know about hacking going on at the paper.
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Original:  The Leveson Inquiry was set up by the Prime Minister following the scandal which engulfed the following widespread allegations that they hacked into voicemails of crime victims and their families including the murdered schoolgirl , and has so far interviewed numerous representatives of the media industry, and alleged victims of press intrusion and phone hacking.
Revised:  The Leveson Inquiry was set up by the Prime Minister following the scandal which engulfed the following widespread allegations they hacked into voicemails of crime victims and their families including the murdered schoolgirl , and has so far interviewed numerous representatives of the media industry, and alleged victims of press intrusion and phone hacking.
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Original: In January 29th 2006, an uncommon snow storm covered much of Portugal.
Revised: Today an uncommon snow storm covered much of Portugal.
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Original:  Apart from mountainous regions, snow is usually a rare vision in this south european country, due to its flat terrain and mild mediterranean climate.
Revised:  Apart from mountainous regions, snow is usually a rare vision in this south European country. This being due to its flat terrain and mild mediterranean climate.
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Original:   January 2006 though saw a coldwave sweeping across Europe, and since early morning snow fell in seaside towns like Figueira da Foz, in central Portugal, and the storm reached record south locations such as Algarve.
Revised:  However, January 2006 though saw a coldwave sweeping across Europe, and since early morning snow fell in seaside towns like Figueira da Foz, in central Portugal, and the storm reached record south locations such as Algarve.
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Original:   January 2006 though saw a coldwave sweeping across Europe, and since early morning snow fell in seaside towns like Figueira da Foz, in central Portugal, and the storm reached record south locations such as Algarve.
Revised:  January 2006 saw a cold wave sweeping across Europe, and since early morning snow fell in seaside towns like Figueira da Foz, in central Portugal, and the storm reached record south locations such as Algarve.
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Original:  In Montejunto, one hundred people were evacuated from their vehicules .
Revised:  In Montejunto, one hundred people were evacuated from their vehicles .
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Original:  Only minor injuries resulted from several car accidents and fallen trees  .
Revised:  A number of car accidents and fallen trees .
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Original:  However, after serving four terms as US Congressman, the number of terms he pledged that he and no other congressman should serve out, he has since gone back on his word and now is adamently sic against the idea of term limits for Congressmen."
Revised:  However, after serving four terms as US Congressman, the number of terms he pledged that he and no other congressman should serve out, he has since gone back on his word and now is sic against the idea of term limits for Congressmen."
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Original:  However, after serving four terms as US Congressman, the number of terms he pledged that he and no other congressman should serve out, he has since gone back on his word and now is adamently sic against the idea of term limits for Congressmen."
Revised:  However, after serving four terms as US Congressman, the number of terms he pledged that he and no other congressman should serve out, he has since gone back on his word and now is adamently adamantly against the idea of term limits for Congressmen."
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Original:  However, after serving four terms as US Congressman, the number of terms he pledged that he and no other congressman should serve out, he has since gone back on his word and now is adamantly  against the idea of term limits for Congressmen."
Revised:  However, after serving four terms as US Congressman, the number of terms he pledged that he and no other congressman should serve out, he has since gone back on his word and now is adamently against the idea of term limits for Congressmen."
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Original:  However, after serving four terms as US Congressman, the number of terms he pledged that he and no other congressman should serve out, he has since gone back on his word and now is adamantly  against the idea of term limits for Congressmen."
Revised:  However, after serving four terms as US Congressman, the number of terms he pledged that he and no other congressman should serve out, he has since gone back on his word and now is adamantly sic against the idea of term limits for Congressmen."
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Original:  The block was lifted shortly thereafter by a disagreeing admin.
Revised:  The block was lifted shortly thereafter by a dissenting admin.
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Original:  "If they wanted to put in their side of things, that would seem ethically relevant, rather than just omitting it.  
Revised:  "If they wanted to put in their side of things, that would seem ethically relevant, rather than just omitting it. " 
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Original:  In fact it would be fair to say the vast majority of edits were neutral, correcting factual, spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors.
Revised:  Many edits have been made which were neutral, correcting factual, spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors.
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Original:  Joseph Nzirorera, a third man accused alongside Ngirumpatse and Karemera, died as the trial was taking place .
Revised:  Joseph Nzirorera, a third man accused alongside Ngirumpatse and Karemera, died while the trial was taking place .
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Original:  Joseph Nzirorera, a third man accused alongside Ngirumpatse and Karemera, died as the trial was taking place .
Revised:  Joseph Nzirorera, a third man accused alongside Ngirumpatse and Karemera, died as the trial was underway .
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Original:  The ICTR had come to the decision that Ngirumpatse had allowed the distribution of weapons amongst the Interahamwe in April 1994.
Revised:  The ICTR found Ngirumpatse had approved weapons distribution amongst the Interahamwe in April 1994.
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Original:  "At that point in the genocide  it could be assumed the weapons were going to be used to kill Tutsis , " the ICTR panel stated .
Revised:  "At that point in the genocide ", the ICTR panel stated, " it could be assumed the weapons were going to be used to kill Tutsis , " the ICTR panel stated .
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Original:  "At that point in the genocide  it could be assumed the weapons were going to be used to kill Tutsis , " the ICTR panel stated .
Revised:  "At that point in the genocide it could be assumed the weapons were going to be used to kill Tutsis " the ICTR panel stated .
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Original:  "At that point in the genocide  it could be assumed the weapons were going to be used to kill Tutsis , " the ICTR panel stated .
Revised:  "At that point in the genocide it could be assumed the weapons were going to be used to kill Tutsis , " .
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Original: The ICTR were set up in the city of in Tanzania with the specific purpose of trying those accused of being the most responsible for the crimes relating to the Rwandan genocide.
Revised: The ICTR were set up in the city of in Tanzania with the specific purpose of trying those accused of being most responsible for the crimes relating to the Rwandan genocide.
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Original:  Previously , Theoneste Bagosora — suspected of being amongst those of highest responsibility in the Rwandan genocide — had his life imprisonment punishment reversed by appeal judges at the ICTR and reduced to a 35 year prison sentence.
Revised:  Recently , Theoneste Bagosora — suspected of being amongst those of highest responsibility in the Rwandan genocide — had his life imprisonment punishment reversed by appeal judges at the ICTR and reduced to a 35 year prison sentence.
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Original:  According to , some of those living in Rwanda were dissatisfied with this decision for the chief of staff of the defence ministry at the time
Revised:  reported anger amongst some Rwandans over this decision for the chief of staff of the defence ministry at the time
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Original: The ICTR were set up in the city of in Northern Tanzania with the specific purpose of trying those accused of being most responsible for the crimes relating to the Rwandan genocide.
Revised: The ICTR were set up in the city of in Tanzania with the specific purpose of trying those accused of being most responsible for the crimes relating to the Rwandan genocide.
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Original: 200px|right Yesterday, Hamas leader Mahmoud al-Zahar responded to Wolf Blitzer's questions with accusations that Israel is dedicated to establishing a state covering all land between the Nile and the Euphrates rivers.
Revised:  Yesterday, Hamas leader Mahmoud al-Zahar responded to Wolf Blitzer's questions with accusations that Israel is dedicated to establishing a state covering all land between the Nile and the Euphrates rivers.
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Original:   Al-Zahar said that the new Israeli state would include Palestine, Sinai, Syria, Jordan and part of Saudi Arabia and that the Knesset lays out the expansion plan.
Revised:  Israeli flag Al-Zahar said that the new Israeli state would include Palestine, Sinai, Syria, Jordan and part of Saudi Arabia and that the Knesset lays out the expansion plan.
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Original:  The Danish newspaper issued an apology to Arab countries later Monday through Petra, a Jordanian news agency, for publishing the series of 12 cartoon depictions of the prophet Mohammad , some of which characterized him as a sort of terrorist.
Revised:  The Danish newspaper issued an apology to Arab countries later Monday through Petra, a Jordanian news agency, for publishing the series of 12 cartoon depictions of the prophet Muhammad , some of which characterized him as a sort of terrorist.
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Original:  The Danish newspaper issued an apology to Arab countries later Monday through Petra, a Jordanian news agency, for publishing the series of 12 cartoon depictions of the prophet Muhammad , some of which characterized him as a sort of terrorist.
Revised:  The Danish newspaper issued an apology to Arab countries later Monday through Petra, a Jordanian news agency, for publishing the series of 12 cartoon depictions of the prophet Mohammad , some of which characterized him as a sort of terrorist.
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Original: Refugee advocates are alarmed by the Indonesian Government making a direct request to Prime Minister John Howard for the return of 43 Papuans .
Revised: Refugee advocates are alarmed by the Indonesian Government 's direct request to Prime Minister John Howard for the return of 43 Papuans .
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Original:   Rob Wesley-Smith from the group Australians for a Free West Papua says the asylum seekers should be dealt with according to Australian law.
Revised:  Rob Wesley-Smith from Australians for a Free West Papua says the asylum seekers should be dealt with according to Australian law.
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Original:  "The people have escaped from there because their lives are at risk," he said.
Revised:  "The people have escaped ... because their lives are at risk," he said.
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Original:  Mr Wesley-Smith says they seem to have valid claims for refugee status.
Revised:  Mr Wesley-Smith says they have valid claims for refugee status.
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Original:  The 43 asylum seekers have told of graphic, disturbing accounts of beatings and torture by the Indonesian military, during interviews with Immigration officers over the past week.
Revised:  The 43 asylum seekers told of graphic, disturbing accounts of beatings and torture by the Indonesian military, during interviews with Immigration officers over the past week.
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Original:  The 43 asylum seekers have told of graphic, disturbing accounts of beatings and torture by the Indonesian military, during interviews with Immigration officers over the past week.
Revised:  The 43 asylum seekers have told of graphic, disturbing accounts of beatings and torture by Indonesian military, during interviews with Immigration officers over the past week.
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