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Original: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " this complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened . " The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people , " according to Gull.
Revised: Speaking of behalf of , Detective Superintendent Stewart Gull explained, " this complex investigation is in its very early stages as we try to establish exactly what happened . " The police force is aware "of the impact of any such serious and tragic incident on the local community, and we have police officers in the area to support the investigation and local people , " 
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Original:  Gull describes Jersey as an "incredibly safe island, probably one of the safest places in the Western world," where events such as these are "extremely rare".
Revised:  Gull described Jersey as an "incredibly safe island, probably one of the safest places in the Western world," where events such as these are "extremely rare".
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Original:  He said that "[d]ealing with multiple deaths of men, women and particularly young children" unsettled members of the emergency services, but they nevertheless remained "tremendously professional".
Revised:  Gull additionally said that "[d]ealing with multiple deaths of men, women and particularly young children" unsettled members of the emergency services, but they nevertheless remained "tremendously professional".
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Original: Numerous witnesses have contacted  police in relation to the incident and are now being interviewed.
Revised: Numerous witnesses have contacted the police in relation to the incident and are now being interviewed.
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Original:  The worst attack was in the city of , where a pair of bombs , a roadside one and a car bomb that exploded after security personnel arrived at the scene of the first explosion , killed 37 people .
Revised:  The worst attack was in the city of , where a pair of bombs , a roadside one and a car bomb that exploded after security personnel arrived at the scene of the first explosion .
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Original:  a total of eleven people were killed in the two cities.
Revised:  up to eleven people were killed in the two cities.
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Original:  The bombings largely targeted Shia Muslim areas of Iraq , and the , an extremist group composed of Sunni Muslims and with ties to Al-Qaeda, has been named as a possible perpetrator of the attacks.
Revised:  The bombings largely targeted Shia Muslim areas of Iraq . The , an extremist group composed of Sunni Muslims and with ties to Al-Qaeda, has been named as a possible perpetrator of the attacks.
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Original:  The , an extremist group composed of Sunni Muslims and with ties to Al-Qaeda , has been named as a possible perpetrator of the attacks.
Revised:  The , an extremist group composed of Sunni Muslims and with ties to , has been named as a possible perpetrator of the attacks.
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Original:  Soon enough,  cars which had slowed to a stop or were parked found that, try as they might, they were unable to move forward on the ice and were therefore stuck.
Revised:  Soon enough, cars which had slowed to a stop or were parked find that, try as they might, they were unable to move forward on the ice and were therefore stuck.
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Original:  Initially a prank played on a friend, the false story   made rounds in the media after Seigenthaler discovered and denounced it in an USA Today op-ed article.
Revised:  Initially a prank played on a friend, the false story made rounds in the media after Seigenthaler discovered and denounced it in a USA Today op-ed article.
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Original: 150px Brian Chase, 38, of Nashville, Tenn., hand-delivered a letter to the offices of John Seigenthaler Sr. in which he admits responsibility for false information he anonymously posted in a Wikipedia article.
Revised:  Brian Chase, 38, of Nashville, Tenn., hand-delivered a letter to the offices of John Seigenthaler Sr. in which he admits responsibility for false information he anonymously posted in a Wikipedia article.
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Original: Brian Chase, 38, of Nashville, Tenn. , hand-delivered a letter to the offices of John Seigenthaler Sr. in which he admits responsibility for false information he anonymously posted in a Wikipedia article.
Revised: Brian Chase, 38, of Nashville, Tennessee , hand-delivered a letter to the offices of John Seigenthaler Sr. in which he admits responsibility for false information he anonymously posted in a Wikipedia article.
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Original:  The fake biography made rounds in the media after Seigenthaler discovered and denounced it in a USA Today op-ed article titled  A false Wikipedia 'biography'  . A known free speech advocate, Seigenthaler refused to press charges.
Revised:  The fake biography made rounds in the media after Seigenthaler discovered and denounced it in a USA Today op-ed article titled " A false Wikipedia 'biography' . A known free speech advocate, Seigenthaler refused to press charges.
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Original:  The fake biography made rounds in the media after Seigenthaler discovered and denounced it in a USA Today op-ed article titled  A false Wikipedia 'biography'  . A known free speech advocate, Seigenthaler refused to press charges.
Revised:  The fake biography made rounds in the media after Seigenthaler discovered and denounced it in a USA Today op-ed article titled A false Wikipedia 'biography' " . A known free speech advocate, Seigenthaler refused to press charges.
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Original: Justice Secretary states that Lothian and Borders Police is tackling the problem of dirty money that has been obtained through criminal activity in a serious matter , and Constable Livingstone has encouraged this, appealing to local communities to provide information and come forth immediately either to Crimestoppers or the Lothian and Borders Police.
Revised: Justice Secretary states that Lothian and Borders Police is tackling the problem of dirty money that has been obtained through criminal activity in a serious matter . Constable Livingstone has encouraged this, appealing to local communities to provide information and come forth immediately either to Crimestoppers or the Lothian and Borders Police.
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Original: Justice Secretary states that Lothian and Borders Police is tackling the problem of dirty money that has been obtained through criminal activity in a serious matter , and Constable Livingstone has encouraged this, appealing to local communities to provide information and come forth immediately either to Crimestoppers or the Lothian and Borders Police.
Revised: Justice Secretary states that Lothian and Borders Police is tackling the problem of dirty money that has been obtained through criminal activity in a serious matter , and Constable Livingstone has encouraged this, appealing to local communities to provide information and come forth immediately either to or the Lothian and Borders Police.
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Original:  Solicitor General QC has affirmed that they will take a robust approach to those that profit from crime, using the vast powers at their disposal in crime legislation that have procured more than in seizures from crooks through the Proceeds of Crime Act and Scottish Government’s Cashback initiative ;
Revised:  Solicitor General QC has affirmed that they will take a robust approach to those that profit from crime, using the vast powers at their disposal . The crime legislation in question has procured more than in seizures from crooks through the Proceeds of Crime Act and Scottish Government’s Cashback initiative ;
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Original:  Solicitor General QC has affirmed that they will take a robust approach to those that profit from crime, using the vast powers at their disposal in crime legislation that have procured more than in seizures from crooks through the Proceeds of Crime Act and Scottish Government’s Cashback initiative ;
Revised:  Solicitor General QC has affirmed that they will take a robust approach to those that profit from crime, using the vast powers at their disposal in crime legislation that have procured more than in seizures from crooks through the Proceeds of Crime Act and Scottish Government’s Cashback initiative . It has been
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Original:  The crime legislation in question has procured more than in seizures from crooks through the Proceeds of Crime Act and Scottish Government’s Cashback initiative .
Revised:  The crime legislation in question has procured more than in seizures from crooks .
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Original:  has revealed a new system in conjunction with the Scottish whereby users can report criminal activity and concerns to police using the social networking site.
Revised: Facebook has revealed a new system in conjunction with the Scottish whereby users can report criminal activity and concerns to police using the social networking site.
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Original:  The game, played at in  front of 71,088 spectators, marked the Broncos' third Super Bowl victory and the first since 1999.
Revised:  The game, played at in in front of 71,088 spectators, marked the Broncos' third Super Bowl victory and the first since 1999.
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Original:  The game, played at in  front of 71,088 spectators, marked the Broncos' third Super Bowl victory and the first since 1999.
Revised:  The game, played at in front of 71,088 spectators, marked the Broncos' third Super Bowl victory and their first since 1999.
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Original:  Unfortunately  , Miller forced Newton to fumble at the Panthers' four-yard line and Ward recovered.
Revised:  Unfortunately for the Panthers , Miller forced Newton to fumble at the Panthers' four-yard line and Ward recovered.
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Original:  With 3:08 left in the game, Denver's sealed the game with a two-yard touchdown run, followed by Manning's to . Miller ended the game with 2.5 sacks and two forced fumbles and was awarded the . 39-year-old Manning, who is the oldest quarterback to start a Super Bowl  , completed 13 of 23 passes for 141 yards with an interception and a lost fumble.
Revised:  With 3:08 left in the game, Denver's sealed the game with a two-yard touchdown run, followed by Manning's to . Miller ended the game with 2.5 sacks and two forced fumbles and was awarded the . Manning, who is the oldest quarterback to start a Super Bowl , completed 13 of 23 passes for 141 yards with an interception and a lost fumble.
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Original: On Sunday, the 12–4 defeated the 15–1 in by a score of 24–10.
Revised: On Sunday, the defeated the in by a score of 24–10.
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Original:   The Panthers kicked off to start the game, and the Broncos scored first with ' 34-yard field goal .
Revised:  The Panthers kicked off to start the game, and the Broncos scored first with ' 34-yard .
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Original:  After both teams exchanged punts, the Broncos scored again when linebacker stripped the ball from , forcing him to fumble , and the ball was recovered by in the endzone to result in a Denver touchdown.
Revised:  After both teams exchanged punts, the Broncos scored again when linebacker stripped the ball from , forcing him to , and the ball was recovered by in the endzone to result in a Denver touchdown.
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Original:  however, the Broncos failed to capitalize when was intercepted by .
Revised:  however, the Broncos failed to capitalize when was by .
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Original:  In the second half, the Panthers had a chance to narrow the margin to three points, but kicker 's 44-yard field goal attempt hit the  right upright.
Revised:  In the second half, the Panthers had a chance to narrow the margin to three points, but kicker 's 44-yard field goal attempt hit the goal post's right upright.
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Original:  Afterwards, Manning was sacked by Ealy and fumbled;
Revised:  Afterwards, Manning was by Ealy and fumbled;
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Original: The  Government has released a document which suggests that both reporters and top editors of News of the world used and sanctioned phone hacking.
Revised: The Government has released a document which suggests that both reporters and top editors of used and sanctioned phone hacking.
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Original:  The release of the documents contradict the statement made by James Murdoch and other News of the World executives made in Julythis year who state that the hacking was the fault of one single 'rogue' reporter.
Revised:  The release of the documents contradict statements made by and other News of the World executives made in Julythis year who state that the hacking was the fault of one single 'rogue' reporter.
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Original:  The release of the documents contradict the statement made by James Murdoch and other News of the World executives made in Julythis year who state that the hacking was the fault of one single 'rogue' reporter.
Revised:  The release of the documents contradict the statement made by James Murdoch and other News of the World executives made last July, claiming that the hacking was the fault of one single 'rogue' reporter.
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Original:  The documents included a letter written by a former reporter, Clive Goodman , the only convicted person in the trial so far.
Revised:  The documents included a letter written by a former reporter, , the only convicted person in the trial so far.
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Original:  "This practice was widely discussed in the daily editorial conference, until explicit reference to it was banned by the Editor"  Goodman wrote.
Revised:  "This practice was widely discussed in the daily editorial conference, until explicit reference to it was banned by the Editor" , Goodman wrote.
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Original:   The letter  which was addressed to reporter Neville Thurlbeck, was denied being sighted by James Murdoch and suggests that the phone hacking scandal goes well beyond single reporters.
Revised:  The letter , which was addressed to reporter Neville Thurlbeck, was denied being sighted by James Murdoch and suggests that the phone hacking scandal goes well beyond single reporters.
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Original:   The letter  which was addressed to reporter Neville Thurlbeck, was denied being sighted by James Murdoch and suggests that the phone hacking scandal goes well beyond single reporters.
Revised:  The letter which was addressed to reporter Neville Thurlbeck, suggests that the phone hacking scandal goes well beyond single reporters.
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Original:  News International, the owner of the defunct News of the World released a statement recognising the seriousness of the letter and that it was "working in constructive and open ways with the police and government".
Revised:  In a statement recognising the seriousness of the letter, , the owner of the defunct News of the World released a statement recognising the seriousness of the letter and that it was "working in constructive and open ways with the police and government".
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Original:  News International, the owner of the defunct News of the World released a statement recognising the seriousness of the letter and that it was "working in constructive and open ways with the police and government".
Revised:  News International, the owner of the defunct News of the World , said that it was "working in constructive and open ways with the police and government".
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Original:  The letter also stated that the jailed Clive Goodman would be given his job back if he kept quiet about the illegal voicemail tapping.
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Original:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have called for, four senior members from News International and News of the World  including the tabloid's former editor Andy Coulson and Les Hinton  to reappear due to the recent evidence .
Revised:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have urged four senior members from News International and News of the World including the tabloid's former editor Andy Coulson and Les Hinton to reappear due to the recent evidence .
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Original:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have called for, four senior members from News International and News of the World  including the tabloid's former editor Andy Coulson and Les Hinton  to reappear due to the recent evidence .
Revised:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have called for, four senior members from News International and News of the World , including the tabloid's former editor Andy Coulson and Les Hinton to reappear due to the recent evidence .
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Original:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have called for, four senior members from News International and News of the World  including the tabloid's former editor Andy Coulson and Les Hinton  to reappear due to the recent evidence .
Revised:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have called for, four senior members from News International and News of the World including the tabloid's former editor Andy Coulson and Les Hinton , to reappear due to the recent evidence .
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Original:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have called for, four senior members from News International and News of the World  including the tabloid's former editor Andy Coulson and Les Hinton  to reappear due to the recent evidence .
Revised:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have called for, four senior members from News International and News of the World including the tabloid's former editor Andy Coulson and Les Hinton to reappear due to the recent developments .
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Original:  The committee also stated that it would likely call upon James Murdoch, the chairman of News International under suspicion of giving misleading or falsifying evidence during his trial last month
Revised:  The committee also stated that it would likely summon James Murdoch, the chairman of News International under suspicion of giving misleading or falsifying evidence during his trial last month
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Original:  The committee also stated that it would likely call upon James Murdoch, the chairman of News International under suspicion of giving misleading or falsifying evidence during his trial last month
Revised:  The committee also stated that it would likely call upon James Murdoch, the chairman of News International , who is suspected of giving misleading or falsifying evidence during his trial last month
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Original: The release of the documents contradict statements made by and other News of the World executives made last July, claiming that the hacking was the fault of one single 'rogue' reporter.
Revised: The release of the documents contradict statements and other News of the World executives made last July, claiming that the hacking was the fault of one single 'rogue' reporter.
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Original: The release of the documents contradict statements made by and other News of the World executives made last July, claiming that the hacking was the fault of one single 'rogue' reporter.
Revised: The release of the documents contradict statements made by and other News of the World executives made last July, claiming that the hacking was the fault of one single "rogue" reporter.
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Original:  The letter also stated that the jailed Clive Goodman would be given his job back if he kept quiet about the illegal voicemail tapping.
Revised:  He further claimed that he was promised that he would be given his job back if he kept quiet about the illegal voicemail tapping.
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Original:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have urged four senior members from News International and News of the World, including the tabloid's former editor Andy Coulson and Les Hinton, to reappear due to the recent developments.
Revised:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have urged four senior members from News International and News of the World, including former executives Andy Coulson and Les Hinton, to reappear due to the recent developments.
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Original: The British Government has released a document  which suggests that both reporters and top editors of used and sanctioned phone hacking.
Revised: The British Government has released a document , which suggests that both reporters and top editors of used and sanctioned phone hacking.
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Original:  The release of the documents contradict statements and other News of the World executives made last July, claiming that the hacking was the fault of one single "rogue" reporter.
Revised:  The release of the documents contradicts statements that and other News of the World executives made last July, claiming that the hacking was the fault of one single "rogue" reporter.
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Original: The release of the documents contradicts statements that and other News of the World executives made this July, claiming that the hacking was the fault of one single "rogue" reporter.
Revised: The release of the documents contradicts statements that and other News of the World executives made this July, claiming that the hacking was the fault of one single 'rogue' reporter.
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Original:  "This practice was widely discussed in the daily editorial conference, until explicit reference to it was banned by the Editor ", Goodman wrote.
Revised:  "This practice was widely discussed in the daily editorial conference, until explicit reference to it was banned by the Editor ," Goodman wrote.
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Original:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal have urged four senior members from News International and News of the World, including former executives Andy Coulson and Les Hinton, to reappear  due to the recent developments.
Revised:  A parliamentary committee looking into the scandal has urged four senior members from News International and News of the World, including former executives Andy Coulson and Les Hinton, to reappear due to the recent developments.
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Original:  The committee also stated that it would likely summon James Murdoch, the chairman of News International, who is suspected of giving misleading or falsifying evidence during his parliamentary hearing last month
Revised:  The committee also stated that it would likely summon James Murdoch, the Chairman of News International, who is suspected of giving misleading or falsifying evidence during his parliamentary hearing last month
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Original:  The committee also stated that it would likely summon James Murdoch, the chairman of News International, who is suspected of giving misleading or falsifying evidence during his parliamentary hearing last month
Revised:  The committee also stated that it would likely summon James Murdoch, the chairman of News International, who is suspected of falsifying or giving misleading evidence during his parliamentary hearing last month
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Original: When launched in the American and European markets, stopres were sold out earliy .
Revised: When launched in the American and European markets, stores were sold out earliy .
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Original: When launched in the American and European markets, stopres were sold out earliy .
Revised: When launched in the American and European markets, stopres were sold out early .
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Original: When launched in the American and European markets, stores were sold out early.
Revised: When launched in the American and European markets, stores sold out early.
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Original:  In Japan, reports say that fewer than 50  were sold in the first 2 hours of it's release.
Revised:  In Japan, reports say that fewer than 50 units were sold in the first 2 hours of it's release.
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