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Original:  As a Churchman Sir James Duckworth was a committed Christian, a lifelong member of the United Methodist Free Church (UMFC).
Revised:  As a Churchman Sir James Duckworth was a committed Christian, a lifelong member of the United Methodist Free Churches (UMFC).
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Original:  He was the first Rochdale mayor to observe 'Mayoral Sunday' and on Sunday 13 November 1892 he and the Corporation attended the morning service at St Chads Parish Church and in the evening at Castlemere UMFC.
Revised:  He was the first Rochdale mayor to observe 'Mayoral Sunday' and on Sunday 13 November 1892 he and the Corporation attended the morning service at St Chad's Parish Church and in the evening at Castlemere UMFC.
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Original:  1900 photograph Sir James Duckworth (14 February 1840 – 1 January 1915) was a self-made English businessman from Rochdale in Lancashire who rose from poverty to found a large chain a grocery shops known popularly as "Jimmy Duck's" and entered politics as a Liberal.
Revised:  1900 ) Sir James Duckworth (14 February 1840 – 1 January 1915) was a self-made English businessman from Rochdale in Lancashire who rose from poverty to found a large chain a grocery shops known popularly as "Jimmy Duck's" and entered politics as a Liberal.
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Original:  He served three times as Mayor of Rochdale, and was elected twice as a member of parliament (MP) for constituencies near Manchester .
Revised:  He served three times as Mayor of Rochdale, and was elected twice as a member of parliament (MP) .
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Original:  The business (which was popularly known as "Jimmy Duck's") continued to prosper and was incorporated in 1895 as a Limited Company formally called "James Duckworth Ltd", with his only son, also called James Duckworth, as vice-chairman.
Revised:  The business (which was popularly known as "Jimmy Duck's") continued to prosper and was incorporated in 1895 as a limited company formally called "James Duckworth Ltd", with his only son, also called James Duckworth, as vice-chairman.
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Original:  The firm moved beyond grocery to include bakery, confectionery, general provisions, bookselling, and even hotel and coffee house keeping.
Revised:  The firm moved beyond grocery to include bakery, confectionery, general provisions, bookselling, and even hotel and coffee-house keeping.
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Original:  His other business interests included involvement in the cotton industry in the Stockport area, and to newspapers as proprietor of both the Manchester Weekly Chronicle and also of the Cheshire and County News He also bought the Rochdale Coffee House Company, partly for commercial gain but also in support of temperance and to create in each of the taverns a large room fitted with cubicles for the accommodation of working men who needed temporary lodgings.
Revised:  His other business interests included involvement in the cotton industry in the Stockport area, and to newspapers as proprietor of both the Manchester Weekly Chronicle and the Cheshire and County News He also bought the Rochdale Coffee House Company, partly for commercial gain but also in support of temperance and to create in each of the taverns a large room fitted with cubicles for the accommodation of working men who needed temporary lodgings.
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Original:  Duckworth won the seat by a narrow margin of only 300 votes (less than 3\% of the total), but at the 1900 general election he was unseated by an even smaller margin by the Conservative candidate Edward Brocklehurst Fielden.
Revised:  Duckworth won the seat by only 300 votes (less than 3\% of the total), but at the 1900 general election he was unseated by an even smaller margin by the Conservative candidate Edward Brocklehurst Fielden.
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Original:  As a Churchman Sir James Duckworth was a committed Christian, a lifelong member of the United Methodist Free Churches (UMFC).
Revised:  Sir James Duckworth was a committed Christian, a lifelong member of the United Methodist Free Churches (UMFC).
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Original: James Duckworth photographed by John Benjamin Stone (1900) Sir James Duckworth (14 February 1840 – 1 January 1915) was a self-made English businessman from Rochdale in Lancashire who rose from poverty to found a large chain a grocery shops known popularly as "Jimmy Duck's" and entered politics as a Liberal.
Revised: James Duckworth photographed by John Benjamin Stone (1900) Sir James Duckworth (14 February 1840 – 1 January 1915) was a self-made English businessman from Rochdale , Lancashire who rose from poverty to found a large chain a grocery shops known popularly as "Jimmy Duck's" and entered politics as a Liberal.
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Original:  Early life Duckworth was born on 14 February 1840 at Balladin Brook, near Haslingden in Rossendale .
Revised:  Early life Duckworth was born on 14 February 1840 at Balladin Brook, near Haslingden , Rossendale, Lancashire .
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Original: James Duckworth photographed by John Benjamin Stone ( 1900 ) Sir James Duckworth (14 February 1840 – 1 January 1915) was a self-made English businessman from Rochdale, Lancashire who rose from poverty to found a large chain a grocery shops known popularly as "Jimmy Duck's" and entered politics as a Liberal.
Revised: Duckworth in 1900 ) Sir James Duckworth (14 February 1840 – 1 January 1915) was a self-made English businessman from Rochdale, Lancashire who rose from poverty to found a large chain a grocery shops known popularly as "Jimmy Duck's" and entered politics as a Liberal.
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Original: James Duckworth photographed by John Benjamin Stone ( 1900 ) Sir James Duckworth (14 February 1840 – 1 January 1915) was a self-made English businessman from Rochdale, Lancashire who rose from poverty to found a large chain a grocery shops known popularly as "Jimmy Duck's" and entered politics as a Liberal.
Revised: James Duckworth photographed by John Benjamin Stone ( 1900 Sir James Duckworth (14 February 1840 – 1 January 1915) was a self-made English businessman from Rochdale, Lancashire who rose from poverty to found a large chain a grocery shops known popularly as "Jimmy Duck's" and entered politics as a Liberal.
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Original: Liberal Party (UK) MPs for English constituencies Category:UK MPs 1895–1900 Category:UK MPs 1906–1910 Category:Knights Bachelor Category:People from Rochdale Category:People from Haslingden Category:Mayors of Rochdale Category:Members of Lancashire County Council Category:British grocers Category:English businesspeople Category:British newspaper publishers (people) Category:English Methodists Category:Textile workers Category:Members of the Parliament of the United Kingdom for Stockport 
Revised: Liberal Party (UK) MPs for English constituencies Category:UK MPs 1895–1900 Category:UK MPs 1906–1910 Category:Knights Bachelor Category:People from Rochdale Category:People from Haslingden Category:Mayors of Rochdale Category:Members of Lancashire County Council Category:British grocers Category:English businesspeople Category:British newspaper publishers (people) Category:English Methodists Category:Textile workers Category:Members of the Parliament of the United Kingdom for Stockport Category:19th-century English businesspeople
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Original:  During the swine flu outbreak in 2009 in the UK, in an article titled "Closure of schools during an influenza pandemic" published in The Lancet Infectious Diseases, a group of epidemiologists endorsed the closure of schools to interrupt the course of the infection, slow the further spread and buy time to research and produce a vaccine.
Revised: The 2009 swine flu pandemic caused social distancing to rise in popularity, most notably in Mexico, with the country's Ministry of Health advising people to avoid handshakes and kissing as ways of greeting people. A mandatory nationwide school closure enacted in Mexico, which lasted for 18 days from late April 2009 to early May 2009, was a form of social distancing aimed at reducing the transmission of Swine flu. A study from 2011 found the mandatory nationwide school closure and other forms of social distancing in Mexico were effective at reducing influenza transmission rates. During the swine flu outbreak in 2009 in the UK, in an article titled "Closure of schools during an influenza pandemic" published in The Lancet Infectious Diseases, a group of epidemiologists endorsed the closure of schools to interrupt the course of the infection, slow the further spread and buy time to research and produce a vaccine.
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Original:  During this time in Canada, "community quarantine" was used to reduce transmission of the disease with moderate success . 2009 swine flu pandemic The 2009 swine flu pandemic caused social distancing to rise in popularity, most notably in Mexico, with the country's Ministry of Health advising people to avoid handshakes and kissing as ways of greeting people.
Revised:  During this time in Canada, "community quarantine" was used to reduce transmission of the disease with moderate success 2009 swine flu pandemic The 2009 swine flu pandemic caused social distancing to rise in popularity, most notably in Mexico, with the country's Ministry of Health advising people to avoid handshakes and kissing as ways of greeting people.
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Original: Derivatives The concept of social distancing have been reused by biologists to raise awareness about safety and do-not-disturb distances between humans and animals.
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Original: History It is believed by some that the origins of could be traced to the ancient Parthian games (moderday Turkmenistan-Iran  , where acrobats and horsemanship usually displayed their skills on cantering horses.
Revised: History It is believed by some that the origins of could be traced to the ancient Parthian games (moderday Turkmenistan-Iran ) , where acrobats and horsemanship usually displayed their skills on cantering horses.
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Original: History It is believed by some that the origins of could be traced to the ancient Parthian games ( moderday Turkmenistan-Iran), where acrobats and horsemanship usually displayed their skills on cantering horses.
Revised: History It is believed by some that the origins of could be traced to the ancient Parthian games ( modernday Turkmenistan-Iran), where acrobats and horsemanship usually displayed their skills on cantering horses.
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Original: History It is believed by some that the origins of  could be traced to the ancient Parthian games(modernday Turkmenistan-Iran) , where acrobats and horsemanship usually displayed their skills on cantering horses.
Revised: History It is believed by some that the origins of could be traced to the ancient Parthian games(modernday Turkmenistan-Iran) , where acrobats usually displayed their skills on cantering horses.
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Original:  Equestrian Vaulting Australia | Home Vaulting has a history as an equestrian act at circuses, but its origins stretch back at least two-thousand years.
Revised:  Vaulting has a history as an equestrian act at circuses, but its origins stretch back at least two-thousand years.
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Original:  Alumni Only - American Vaulting Association More recently, it is beginning to gain popularity in the United States URL
Revised:  More recently, it is beginning to gain popularity in the United States URL
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Original:  There are compulsory exercises and depending on class the vaulter performs seven or eight of them: Compulsory Flag MovementDescriptionVault OnThe vault-on leads to the frontways seat on the horse.
Revised:  There are compulsory exercises and depending on class the vaulter performs seven or eight of them: MovementDescriptionVault OnThe vault-on leads to the frontways seat on the horse.
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Original: Competitive vaulting Individual freestyle In competitive vaulting, vaulters compete as individuals, pairs (pas-de-deux) and teams.
Revised: Competition Individual freestyle In competitive vaulting, vaulters compete as individuals, pairs (pas-de-deux) and teams.
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Original:  On  16 October 1779, following a brief attempt at siege, a force of 150 British soldiers and seamen assaulted and captured the fortifications at San Fernando de Omoa in the Captaincy General of Guatemala (now Honduras) on the Gulf of Honduras.
Revised:  On the 16 October 1779, following a brief attempt at siege, a force of 150 British soldiers and seamen assaulted and captured the fortifications at San Fernando de Omoa in the Captaincy General of Guatemala (now Honduras) on the Gulf of Honduras.
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Original:  King Carlos III set the defense of the Captaincy General of Guatemala as one of his highest priorities in the Americas, after the conquest of British West Florida.
Revised:  King Carlos III set the defence of the Captaincy General of Guatemala as one of his highest priorities in the Americas, after the conquest of British West Florida.
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Original:  His forces seized the initiative in North America, where they rapidly captured the British outpost at Baton Rouge in September 1779, before the British were able to marshal significant defensive forces in the area.
Revised:  His forces seized the initiative in North America, where they rapidly captured the British outpost at Baton Rouge in September 1779, before the British were able to marshal any kind of significant defensive force in the area.
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Original:  Even when he and Captain William Dalrymple arrived at Omoa on  25 September with 500 men, they were forced to retreat after a brief exchange of cannon fire.
Revised:  Even when he and Captain William Dalrymple arrived at Omoa on the 25 September with 500 men, they were forced to retreat after a brief exchange of cannon fire.
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Original: Chávez (2004), p. 152 up18th century print depicting a British sailor offering a sword to an unarmed Spaniard On the night of  20 October, a small number of British attackers climbed into the fort and opened one of the gates.
Revised: Chávez (2004), p. 152 up18th century print depicting a British sailor offering a sword to an unarmed Spaniard On the night of the 20 October, a small number of British attackers climbed into the fort and opened one of the gates.
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Original:  Among the spoils the British won when they gained control of Omoa were two Spanish ships, anchored in the harbor , that held more than three million Spanish dollars of silver.
Revised:  Among the spoils the British won when they gained control of Omoa were two Spanish ships, anchored in the harbour , that held more than three million Spanish dollars of silver.
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Original:  On  25 November his forces began besieging the fort, now under Dalrymple's control, engaging in regular exchanges of cannon fire.
Revised:  On the 25 November his forces began besieging the fort, now under Dalrymple's control, engaging in regular exchanges of cannon fire.
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Original:  He then attempted an assault on  29 November but difficulties with his artillery caused him to call it off.
Revised:  He then attempted an assault on the 29 November but difficulties with his artillery caused him to call it off.
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Original:  Captain William Dalrymple, in his letter to Lord George Germain dated October 21 , 1779, wrote:Your lordship will pardon my mentioning an instance of an elevated mind in a British tar, which amazed the Spaniards, and gave them a very high idea of English valour: not content with one cutlass, he scrambled up the walls with two;
Revised:  Captain William Dalrymple, in his letter to Lord George Germain dated the 21 , 1779, wrote:Your lordship will pardon my mentioning an instance of an elevated mind in a British tar, which amazed the Spaniards, and gave them a very high idea of English valour: not content with one cutlass, he scrambled up the walls with two;
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Original:  Notes References  Contains surrender agreement (pp. 163ff).
Revised:  References Contains surrender agreement (pp. 163ff).
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Original:  Notes References  Contains surrender agreement (pp. 163ff).
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Original: up18th century print depicting a British sailor offering a sword to an unarmed Spaniard On the night of the 20 October, a small number of British attackers climbed into the fort and opened one of the gates.
Revised:  On the night of the 20 October, a small number of British attackers climbed into the fort and opened one of the gates.
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Original: History  The origins of Jimma are obscure, although prior to the Oromo migrations, the territory this kingdom came to occupy had been part of the Kingdom of Kaffa.
Revised: History Establishment The origins of Jimma are obscure, although prior to the Oromo migrations, the territory this kingdom came to occupy had been part of the Kingdom of Kaffa.
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Original: The Kingdom of Jimma  was one of the kingdoms in the Gibe region of Ethiopia that emerged in the 19th century.
Revised: The Kingdom of Jimma () was one of the kingdoms in the Gibe region of Ethiopia that emerged in the 19th century.
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Original: The Kingdom of Jimma () was one of the Oromo kingdoms in the Gibe region of Ethiopia that emerged in the 18th and 19th century.
Revised: The Kingdom of Jimma () was an Oromo kingdom in the Gibe region of Ethiopia that emerged in the 18th and 19th century.
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Original: Establishment The origins of Jimma are obscure, although prior to the Oromo migrations, the territory this kingdom came to occupy had been part of the Kingdom of Kaffa.
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Original: The Kingdom of Jimma () was an Oromo kingdom in the Gibe region of Ethiopia that emerged in the 18th and 19th century.
Revised: The Kingdom of Jimma () was an Oromo kingdom in the Gibe region of Ethiopia that emerged in the 18th century.
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Original: The anamniotes are an informal group comprising the fishes and the amphibians, the so-called "lower vertebrates", which lay their eggs in water.
Revised: The anamniotes are an informal group comprising the fish and the amphibians, the so-called "lower vertebrates", which lay their eggs in water.
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Original: The anamniotes are an informal group comprising the fish and the amphibians, the so-called "lower vertebrates", which lay their eggs in water.
Revised: The anamniotes are an informal group comprising the fishes and the amphibians, the so-called "lower vertebrates", which lay their eggs in water.
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Original:  Colbert, E.H. Morales, M. (2001): Colbert's Evolution of the Vertebrates: A History of the Backboned Animals Through Time.
Revised:  Morales, M. (2001): Colbert's Evolution of the Vertebrates: A History of the Backboned Animals Through Time.
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Original:  John Wiley%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Sons, Inc, New York - . The water helps in the diffusion of waste products (particularly ammonia), allowing the embryo to complete embryonic development without being poisoned by their own waste products.
Revised:  John Wiley%DIFDELCMD < & %%% The water helps in the diffusion of waste products (particularly ammonia), allowing the embryo to complete embryonic development without being poisoned by their own waste products.
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Original: ]] The group is characterized by retaining the primitive vertebrate condition in several traits: Romer, A.S. T.S. Parsons.
Revised: ]] The group is characterized by retaining the primitive vertebrate condition in several traits: T.S. Parsons.
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Original: The Methuselah-like proteins are G protein-coupled receptors found in insects, and are related to ageing and reproduction.
Revised: The Methuselah-like proteins are G protein-coupled receptors found in insects, and are related to aging and reproduction.
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Original: The Methuselah-like proteins are  G protein-coupled receptors found in insects , and are related to aging and reproduction.
Revised: The Methuselah-like proteins are G protein-coupled receptors found in insects that play a role in aging and reproduction.
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Original:  Blocking them can extend the life span of the animal and make it more resistant to free radicals and starvation, but also reduce reproduction and increase cold sensitivity.
Revised:  Antagonizing these receptors can extend the life span of the animal and make it more resistant to free radicals and starvation, but also reduce reproduction and increase cold sensitivity.
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Original: People from Achkhoy-Martanovsky District Category:Living people Category:Chechen people Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Russian footballers Category:Association football midfielders Category:FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:FC Luch Vladivostok players Category:Russian expatriate footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Poland Category:Lechia Gdańsk players Category:Russian Premier League players Category:FC SKA-Khabarovsk players Category:FC Anzhi Makhachkala playe
Revised: People from Achkhoy-Martanovsky District Category:Living people Category:Chechen people Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Russian footballers Category:Association football midfielders Category:FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:FC Luch Vladivostok players Category:Russian expatriate footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Poland Category:Lechia Gdańsk players Category:Russian Premier League players Category:FC SKA-Khabarovsk players Category:FC Anzhi Makhachkala players Category:Sportspeople from Chechny
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Original:  born 20 February 1988) is a Russian football attacking midfielder of Chechen origin who plays for FC SKA-Khabarovsk .
Revised:  born 20 February 1988) is a Russian football attacking midfielder of Chechen origin .
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Original:  born 20 February 1988) is a Russian football attacking midfielder of Chechen origin .
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Original:  born 7 February 1988) is a Russian football right-back of Chechen origin who plays for Akhmat.
Revised:  born 7 February 1988) is a Russian football player of Chechen origin who plays for Akhmat.
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Original:  Currently, he plays for FC Angusht Nazran.
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Original:  He plays for FC Angusht Nazran.
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Original:  born April 23 , 1989) is a  Russian professional footballer.
Revised:  born 23 , 1989) is a Russian professional footballer.
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Original:   He made his professional debut in the Russian First Division in 2006 for FC Angusht Nazran.
Revised:  Club career He made his professional debut in the Russian First Division in 2006 for FC Angusht Nazran.
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Original:  Career stats at Footballfacts External links Profile by RFPL Category:1989 births Category:Living people Category:Russian footballers Category:  FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:FC Angusht Nazran players Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen people Category:Association footballers not categorized by positi
Revised:  External links Profile by RFPL Category:1989 births Category:Living people Category:Russian footballers Category: FC Akhmat Grozny players Category:FC Angusht Nazran players Category:Russian Premier League players Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Chechen people Category:Association footballers not categorized by positi
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