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Original:  "I was amazed to find that even the shoe-laces were preserved," recalled Diana Zardaryan, the Armenian student who made the dicovery.
Revised:  The shoe contained grass, although the archaeologists were uncertain as to whether this was to used to maintain the shape of the shoe and/or prepare it for storage.
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Original:  This excellent state of preservation tricked the archaeologists into thinking it was only 700 years old.
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Original:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork  . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years  than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
Revised:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said co-author Dr. Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
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Original:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork  . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years  than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
Revised:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from the University College Cork . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
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Original:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork  . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years  than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
Revised:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork in Ireland . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
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Original:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork  . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years  than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
Revised:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was a few hundred years than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
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Original:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork  . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years  than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
Revised:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years older than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
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Original:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork  . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years  than the shoes worn by Oetzi the Iceman.
Revised:  "We thought initially that the shoe and other objects were about 600-700 years old because they were in such good condition," said Dr Ron Pinhasi from reland's University College Cork . "It was only when the material was dated by the two radiocarbon laboratories in Oxford and in California that we realised that the shoe was older by a few hundred years than the shoes worn by Ötzi the Iceman
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Original:  "We do not know yet what the shoe or other objects were doing in the cave or what the purpose of the cave was , " " We know that there are children's graves at the back of the cave but so little is known about this period that we cannot say with any certainty why all these different objects were found together . " said Pinhasi.
Revised:  "We do not know yet what the shoe or other objects were doing in the cave or what the purpose of the cave was ", said Pinhasi, " " We know that there are children's graves at the back of the cave but so little is known about this period that we cannot say with any certainty why all these different objects were found together . " said Pinhasi.
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Original:  "We do not know yet what the shoe or other objects were doing in the cave or what the purpose of the cave was , " " We know that there are children's graves at the back of the cave but so little is known about this period that we cannot say with any certainty why all these different objects were found together . " said Pinhasi.
Revised:  "We do not know yet what the shoe or other objects were doing in the cave or what the purpose of the cave was , " We know that there are children's graves at the back of the cave but so little is known about this period that we cannot say with any certainty why all these different objects were found together . " said Pinhasi.
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Original:  "We do not know yet what the shoe or other objects were doing in the cave or what the purpose of the cave was , " " We know that there are children's graves at the back of the cave but so little is known about this period that we cannot say with any certainty why all these different objects were found together . " said Pinhasi.
Revised:  "We do not know yet what the shoe or other objects were doing in the cave or what the purpose of the cave was , " " We know that there are children's graves at the back of the cave but so little is known about this period that we cannot say with any certainty why all these different objects were found together " said Pinhasi.
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Original:  "We do not know yet what the shoe or other objects were doing in the cave or what the purpose of the cave was , " " We know that there are children's graves at the back of the cave but so little is known about this period that we cannot say with any certainty why all these different objects were found together . " said Pinhasi.
Revised:  "We do not know yet what the shoe or other objects were doing in the cave or what the purpose of the cave was , " " We know that there are children's graves at the back of the cave but so little is known about this period that we cannot say with any certainty why all these different objects were found together . " 
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Original:  Currently, the oldest known footwear are sandals made from plant fiber, found in the Arnold Research Cave, Missouri  . Sandals from the same age were also found in the Judean Desert, Israel  
Revised:  Currently, the oldest known footwear are sandals made from plant fiber, found in the Arnold Research Cave, Missouri in the United States . Sandals from the same age were also found in the Judean Desert, Israel 
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Original:  Currently, the oldest known footwear are sandals made from plant fiber, found in the Arnold Research Cave, Missouri  . Sandals from the same age were also found in the Judean Desert, Israel  
Revised:  Currently, the oldest known footwear are sandals made from plant fiber, found in the Arnold Research Cave, Missouri . Sandals from the same age were also found in the Judean Desert, Israel . 
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Original: What is thought  to be the world's oldest shoe has been found in a cave in Armenia.
Revised: What is thought What is believed to be the world's oldest shoe has been found in a cave in Armenia.
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Original:  The the leather shoe , over 5,500 year old, was found in a cave in the Vayots Dzor province of Armenia by a team of archaeologists.
Revised:  The the leather shoe , over 5,500 year old, has been found in a cave in the Vayots Dzor province of Armenia by a team of archaeologists.
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Original:  The the leather shoe , over 5,500 year old, was found in a cave in the Vayots Dzor province of Armenia by a team of archaeologists.
Revised:  The the leather shoe , over 5,500 year old, was found in a cave in Armenia by a team of archaeologists.
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Original:  "I was amazed to find that even the shoe-laces were preserved," recalled Diana Zardaryan, the Armenian PhD student who made the discovery.
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Original:  Researchers published details in the journal PLoS ONE .
Revised:  "I was amazed to find that even the shoe-laces were preserved," recalled Diana Zardaryan, the Armenian PhD student who made the discovery .
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Original:  The Armenian shoe is in a perfectly preserved condition and is a few hundred years older than the one found on Ötzi the Iceman, making it the oldest piece of leather footwear in the world  . Researchers published details in the journal PLoS ONE.
Revised:  The Armenian shoe is in a perfectly preserved condition and is a few hundred years older than the one found on Ötzi the Iceman, making it the oldest piece of leather footwear in the world . 
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Original:  The oldest shoes ever discovered were sandals located near Fort Rock in Oregon, dating back to around 10,000 years .
Revised:  Researchers published details in the journal PLoS ONE .
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Original:  Researchers published details in the journal PLoS ONE. Currently, the oldest known footwear are sandals made from plant fiber, found in the Arnold Research Cave, Missouri in the United States.
Revised:  Currently, the oldest known footwear are sandals made from plant fiber, found in the Arnold Research Cave, Missouri in the United States.
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Original: The Armenian shoe is in a perfectly preserved condition and is a few hundred years older than the one found on Ötzi the Iceman, making it the oldest piece of leather footwear in the world , and the oldest shoe find ever in Europe . Researchers published details in the journal PLoS ONE. Currently, the oldest known footwear are sandals made from plant fiber, found in Fort Rock Cave, Oregon in the United States.
Revised: The Armenian shoe is in a perfectly preserved condition and is a few hundred years older than the one found on Ötzi the Iceman, making it the oldest piece of leather footwear in the world . Researchers published details in the journal PLoS ONE. Currently, the oldest known footwear are sandals made from plant fiber, found in Fort Rock Cave, Oregon in the United States.
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Original: On the one year anniversary of Saddam Hussein's capturing at least 7 Iraqi's where killed in a suicide car bomb attack.
Revised: On the one year anniversary of Saddam Hussein's capture, 7 Iraqi's where killed in a suicide car bomb attack.
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Original:  The attack took place about 9 AM Monday  outside the Green Zone , which is home to the Iraqi interim government and several embassies.
Revised:  The attack took place about 9 AM Monday outside the Green Zone which is home to the Iraqi interim government and several embassies.
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Original:   Authorities said the suicide bomber detonated the car while  in line at a checkpoint.
Revised:  Authorities said the suicide bomber detonated the car while it was in line at a checkpoint.
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Original: Several Internet sites have recently been banned in Turkey.
Revised: Several internet sites have recently been banned in Turkey.
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Original:  They had been accused of spying and the murderof their driver . Joshua French and Tjostolv Moland were original sentenced in September 2009.
Revised:  They had been accused of spying and murder . Joshua French and Tjostolv Moland were original sentenced in September 2009.
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Original:  They had been accused of spying and the murderof their driver . Joshua French and Tjostolv Moland were original sentenced in September 2009.
Revised:  They had been accused of spying and the murderof their driver . Joshua French and Tjostolv Moland were originally sentenced in September 2009.
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Original:  The Norwegians were travelling from Uganda to  DR Congo on motorcycles.
Revised:  The Norwegians were travelling from Uganda to the DR Congo on motorcycles.
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Original:  When their bikes broke down  they hired Kasongo to drive them back to Uganda.
Revised:  When their bikes broke down , they hired Kasongo to drive them back to Uganda.
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Original: Two former Norwegian soldiers have been sentenced to death in the Democratic Republic of Congo for the second time, having been accused of spying and murder . Joshua French and Tjostolv Moland were originally sentenced in September 2009, but lost their appeal in December of the same year.
Revised: Two former Norwegian soldiers have been sentenced to death in the Democratic Republic of Congo for the second time, having been accused of spying and murder . Joshua French and Tjostolv Moland were original sentenced in September 2009, but lost their appeal in December of the same year.
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Original: Two former Norwegian soldiers have been sentenced to death in the Democratic Republic of Congo for the second time, having been accused of spying and murder . Joshua French and Tjostolv Moland were originally sentenced in September 2009, but lost their appeal in December of the same year.
Revised: Two former Norwegian soldiers have been sentenced to death in the Democratic Republic of Congo for the second time, having been accused of spying and murder . Joshua French and Tjostolv Moland were originally sentenced in September 2009. They lost their appeal in December of the same year.
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Original:  The latest trial was held in April , and it is reported that the pair are likely to appeal the decision once again .
Revised:  The latest trial was held in April . It is reported that the pair are likely to appeal the decision once again .
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Original:  The latest trial was held in April , and it is reported that the pair are likely to appeal the decision once again .
Revised:  The latest trial was held in April , and it is reported that the pair are likely to appeal the latest decision .
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Original:  The pair have been accused of the murder of Abedi Kasongo while they were travelling from Uganda to the DR Congo on motorcycles.
Revised:  The pair have been accused of the murder of Abedi Kasongo while they were travelling from Uganda to DR Congo on motorcycles.
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Original:  When their bikes broke down , they hired Kasongo to drive them back to Uganda.
Revised:  When their bikes broke down they hired Kasongo to drive them back to Uganda.
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Original:  A spokesperson said  "Each time the military prosecution changes their theory, the witnesses all obligingly change their story.
Revised:  A spokesperson said that "Each time the military prosecution changes their theory, the witnesses all obligingly change their story.
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Original: The pair have been accused of the murder of Abedi Kasongo while they were travelling from Uganda to the DR Congo on motorcycles.
Revised: The pair have been accused of murdering Abedi Kasongo while they were travelling from Uganda to the DR Congo on motorcycles.
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Original:  UK based charity Reprieve condemned the actions of the Congo courts.
Revised:  UK-based charity Reprieve condemned the actions of the Congo courts.
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Original: One of the accused holds duel Norwegian-British citizenship.
Revised: One of the accused holds dual Norwegian-British citizenship.
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Original:  Bush denies all of the allegations brought against him and the university by the NCAA  
Revised:  Bush denies all of the allegations brought against him and the university by the NCAA . 
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Original:  The women's tennis team was also fined $7,000 for allowing a student to use a university-owned credit card to place unauthorized phone calls
Revised:  The women's tennis team was also fined $7,000 for allowing an unidentified student to use a university-owned credit card to place unauthorized phone calls
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Original:  The team will  also be stripped of their national title from the 2004 season and will lose ten football scholarships per year for the 2010, 2011, and 2012 seasons.
Revised:  The team will likely also be stripped of their national title from the 2004 season and will lose ten football scholarships per year for the 2010, 2011, and 2012 seasons.
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Original:  The University of Southern California's football team was heavily penalized by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) yesterday due to several major rules violations involving former player and Heisman Trophy winner Reggie Bush .
Revised:  The University of Southern California's football team was heavily penalized by the (NCAA) yesterday due to several major rules violations involving former player and Heisman Trophy winner Reggie Bush .
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Original:  The University of Southern California's football team was heavily penalized by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) yesterday due to several major rules violations involving former player and Heisman Trophy winner Reggie Bush .
Revised:  The University of Southern California's football team was heavily penalized by the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) yesterday due to several major rules violations involving former player and winner .
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Original:  Meanwhile, Reggie Bush (who now plays for the NFL's New Orleans Saints ) also released a statement.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Reggie Bush (who now plays for the 's ) also released a statement.
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Original:  The report also included punishments for the men's basketball team, which was accused of violating the NCAA's recruiting policy on former player O.J. Mayo .
Revised:  The report also included punishments for the men's basketball team, which was accused of violating the NCAA's recruiting policy on former player .
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Original:  That night, an Australian plane was able to locate her 40-foot (12.2 metre ) long boat, Wild Eyes, which had lost its mast earlier.
Revised:  That night, an Australian plane was able to locate her 40-foot (12.2 -metre ) long boat, Wild Eyes, which had lost its mast earlier.
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Original: Sunderland's parents, Laurence and Marianne, have vigorously defended  claims that their daughter was too young to be attempting such a feat.
Revised: Sunderland's parents, Laurence and Marianne, have vigorously defended against claims that their daughter was too young to be attempting such a feat.
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Original:  The plane's crew was able to make radio contact with Sunderland, and confirmed that she was not injured and had managed to upright her boat , but was unable to continue sailing.
Revised:  The plane's crew was able to make radio contact with Sunderland, and confirmed that she was not injured and that her boat was upright , but was unable to continue sailing.
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Original:  Last year, her brother Zac had set a record when he sailed solo around the world at the age of seventeen.
Revised:  Last year, her brother Zac had completed a circumnavigation when he sailed solo around the world at the age of seventeen.
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Original:  Last year, her brother Zac had completed a circumnavigation when he sailed solo around the world at the age of seventeen.
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Original:  The statement continued: "The family has asked for privacy as they mourn this tragedy  "
Revised:  The statement continued: "The family has asked for privacy as they mourn this tragedy . "
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Original: The driver of the vehicle that struck Zenani Mandela has been arrested and charged with drunk driving.
Revised: The driver of the vehicle of which Zenani Mandela was a passenger has been arrested and charged with drunk driving.
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Original:  Website accompanies its report with pictures of several men who appear to be covered in black makeup and quotes one man, Jim MacIvor, describing witnessing " 30-40 blacked up footballers having a drink", socialising, "being quite boisterous ...
Revised:  Website accompanies its report with pictures of several men who appear to be covered in black makeup and quotes one man, Jim MacIvor, describing witnessing " 30–40 blacked up footballers having a drink", socialising, "being quite boisterous ...
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Original:  [and] quite drunk – and some of them were taking their tops off and stuff like that."
Revised:  [and] quite drunk — and some of them were taking their tops off and stuff like that."
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Original: yesterday tweeted about its intention to hold what it called an '' themed event that evening, although this tweet has since been deleted.
Revised: yesterday about its intention to hold what it called an '' themed event that evening, although this tweet has since been deleted.
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Original: yesterday about its intention to hold what it called an '' themed event that evening, although this tweet has since been deleted.
Revised: yesterday about its intention to hold what it called an '' themed event that evening, although the tweet was later deleted.
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Original:  The website also shared two videos of members of the public confronting some of the men in the group and accusing them of racism.
Revised:  The website also shared video of members of the public confronting some of the men in the group and accusing them of racism.
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Original:  "The university and the Students’ Union have a zero-tolerance approach to racism and will respond robustly to any behaviour that does not meet with our values and expectations , "  their statement said.
Revised:  "The university and the Students’ Union have a zero-tolerance approach to racism and will respond robustly to any behaviour that does not meet with our values and expectations " their statement said.
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