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Original:  Perhaps this gave the studio more insight through its own experience of the virus , as well as providing an early lead .
Revised:  Perhaps this gave the studio more insight through its own experience of the virus , as well as providing an early notice .
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Original:  The coverage that followed, however, caused speculatation among some that damage to their systems lead to a loss of perspective , and perhaps even diminished coverage functionality . CNN treated the story as a potential global crisis, in the manner of coverage as well as in the advice given to viewers.
Revised:  The coverage that followed, however, causes speculatation among some that damage to their systems lead to a loss of perspective , and perhaps even diminished coverage functionality . CNN treated the story as a potential global crisis, in the manner of coverage as well as in the advice given to viewers.
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Original:  The coverage that followed, however, caused speculatation among some that damage to their systems lead to a loss of perspective , and perhaps even diminished coverage functionality . CNN treated the story as a potential global crisis, in the manner of coverage as well as in the advice given to viewers.
Revised:  The coverage that followed, however, caused speculatation among some that the network's perspective was skewed, and that perhaps the damage even diminished reporting ability . CNN treated the story as a potential global crisis, in the manner of coverage as well as in the advice given to viewers.
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Original:  The coverage that followed, however, caused speculatation among some that damage to their systems lead to a loss of perspective , and perhaps even diminished coverage functionality . CNN treated the story as a potential global crisis, in the manner of coverage as well as in the advice given to viewers.
Revised:  The coverage that followed, however, caused speculatation among some that damage to their systems lead to a loss of perspective , and perhaps even diminished coverage functionality . CNN treated the story as a potential global crisis, in its manner of coverage as well as in the advice given to viewers.
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Original:  As events unfolded, they eventually reported a Microsoft statement that the virus was "low-impact" and only affected computers running Windows 2000, which is not typically installed on home computers.
Revised:  After some time, the network eventually obtained a Microsoft statement that the virus was "low-impact" and only affected computers running Windows 2000, which is not typically installed on home computers.
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Original:  As events unfolded, they eventually reported a Microsoft statement that the virus was "low-impact" and only affected computers running Windows 2000, which is not typically installed on home computers.
Revised:  As events unfolded, they eventually reported a Microsoft statement describing the virus as "low-impact" and only affected computers running Windows 2000, which is not typically installed on home computers.
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Original:  As events unfolded, they eventually reported a Microsoft statement that the virus was "low-impact" and only affected computers running Windows 2000, which is not typically installed on home computers.
Revised:  As events unfolded, they eventually reported a Microsoft statement that the virus was "low-impact" and only affecting computers running Windows 2000, which is not typically installed on home computers.
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Original:  Media organizations ABC and the New York times were affected as well.
Revised:  Media organizations ABC and the New York Times were affected as well.
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Original:  The coverage that followed, however, causes speculatation among some that the network's perspective was skewed, and that perhaps the damage even diminished reporting ability.
Revised:  The coverage that followed, however, raises concerns among some that the network's perspective was skewed, and that perhaps the damage even diminished reporting ability.
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Original:  For over 45 minutes  CNN devoted exclusive air-time to this topic , from one viewer's tally .
Revised:  For over 45 minutes , by one viewer's tally, CNN devoted exclusive air-time to this topic , from one viewer's tally .
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Original:  For over 45 minutes  CNN devoted exclusive air-time to this topic , from one viewer's tally .
Revised:  For over 45 minutes CNN devoted exclusive air-time to this topic .
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Original:  CNN stated they were requesting reports from key sources across the nation, including California governor Arnold Schwartzeneggar . After some time, the network eventually obtained a Microsoft statement describing the virus as "low-impact" and only affecting computers running Windows 2000, which is not typically installed on home computers.
Revised:  CNN stated they were requesting reports from key sources across the nation, including California governor Arnold Schwartzenegger . After some time, the network eventually obtained a Microsoft statement describing the virus as "low-impact" and only affecting computers running Windows 2000, which is not typically installed on home computers.
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Original:  CNN stated they were requesting reports from key sources across the nation, including California governor Arnold Schwartzeneggar . After some time, the network eventually obtained a Microsoft statement describing the virus as "low-impact" and only affecting computers running Windows 2000, which is not typically installed on home computers.
Revised:  CNN stated they were requesting reports from key sources across the nation, including California governor Arnold Schwartzeneggar . After some time, the network eventually obtained a Microsoft statement describing the virus as "low-impact" and only affecting computers running Windows 2000.
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Original:  CNN's coverage constrasted with a lack of actual evidence of widespread infections, from this reporter's view.
Revised:  CNN's coverage contrasted with a lack of actual evidence of widespread infections, from this reporter's view.
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Original:  CNN's coverage constrasted with a lack of actual evidence of widespread infections, from this reporter's view.
Revised:  CNN's coverage constrasted with a lack of actual evidence of widespread infections, in this reporter's view.
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Original:  Much of the discussion and advice came from experts probably not officially associated with CNN, so there is a question of whom  to blame.
Revised:  Much of the discussion and advice came from experts probably not officially associated with CNN, so there is a question of whom is to blame.
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Original:  While a firewall may have protected their office network up to now, these infected laptops where able to take out the network from the inside once they connected back to it.
Revised:  While a firewall may have protected their office network up to now, these infected laptops were able to take out the network from the inside once they connected back to it.
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Original:  CNN stated they were requesting reports from key sources across the nation, including California governor Arnold Schwartzenegger .
Revised:  CNN stated they were requesting reports from key sources across the nation, including California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger .
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Original: Cable news giant sees global threat when worm cripples its PCs, but was the danger overstated in a rush to judgement?
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Original:  This story was unique among cyber-attacks reports as the network appearantly learned of the virus through becoming one of its early victims.
Revised:  This story was unique among cyber-attacks reports as the network apparently learned of the virus through becoming one of its early victims.
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Original:  A few were arrested for blocking the streets, causing a huge uproar in the political circles  of Hong Kong .
Revised:  A few were arrested for blocking the streets, causing a huge uproar in the political circles of Hong Kong 
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Original:  However,  Albert Ho said that the Times Square was a public area and the police had no right to stop them .
Revised:  However, Albert Ho said that as Times Square was a public area and the police had no right to stop them .
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Original:  However,  Albert Ho said that the Times Square was a public area and the police had no right to stop them .
Revised:  However, Albert Ho said that the Times Square was a public area the police had no right to stop them .
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Original:   Lee Cheuk-yan , a member of the Alliance, said the C&ED's action was unusual, and  has contacted the department to find out if the department was trying to censor things related to the Tiananmen Square incident  
Revised:  Alliance member Lee Cheuk-yan , a member of the Alliance, said the C&ED's action was unusual, and has contacted the department to find out if the department was trying to censor things related to the Tiananmen Square incident 
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Original:   Lee Cheuk-yan , a member of the Alliance, said the C&ED's action was unusual, and  has contacted the department to find out if the department was trying to censor things related to the Tiananmen Square incident  
Revised:  Lee Cheuk-yan said that C&ED's action was unusual, and has contacted the department to find out if the department was trying to censor things related to the Tiananmen Square incident 
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Original:   Lee Cheuk-yan , a member of the Alliance, said the C&ED's action was unusual, and  has contacted the department to find out if the department was trying to censor things related to the Tiananmen Square incident  
Revised:  Lee Cheuk-yan , a member of the Alliance, said the C&ED's action was unusual, and that he has contacted the department to find out if the department was trying to censor things related to the Tiananmen Square incident 
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Original:   Lee Cheuk-yan , a member of the Alliance, said the C&ED's action was unusual, and  has contacted the department to find out if the department was trying to censor things related to the Tiananmen Square incident  
Revised:  Lee Cheuk-yan , a member of the Alliance, said the C&ED's action was unusual, and has contacted the department to find out if the department was trying to censor things related to the Tiananmen Square incident . 
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Original:  In the past political activities that are taboo in China such as the annual mourning of the Tiananmen Square Incident have been tolerated by the SAR authorities
Revised:  In the past political activities that are taboo in China proper have been tolerated by the SAR authorities
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Original: Although the Causeway Bay piazza is designated as a public space its day to day running is administered by the shopping mall's management , and it was the mall management that made a complaint that the Hong Kong Alliance in Support of Patriotic Democratic Movements in China, or the Alliance for short, had failed to ask permission for their activities.
Revised: Although the Causeway Bay piazza is designated as a public space its day to day running is administered by the shopping mall's management . They made a complaint that the Hong Kong Alliance in Support of Patriotic Democratic Movements in China, or the Alliance for short, had failed to ask permission for their activities.
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Original:   However, Alliance chairman Albert Ho said that as Times Square was a public area the police had no right to stop them, that similar activities had been held before and that he had "...never been treated so barbarically and so violently...".
Revised:  Alliance chairman Albert Ho said that as Times Square was a public area the police had no right to stop them, that similar activities had been held before and that he had "...never been treated so barbarically and so violently...".
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Original: Although the Causeway Bay piazza is designated as a public space, its day to day operations are run by the shopping mall's management.
Revised: Although the Causeway Bay piazza is designated as a public space, its day-to-day operations are run by the shopping mall's management.
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Original:  They made a complaint that the Hong Kong Alliance in Support of Patriotic Democratic Movements in China , or the "Alliance" for short, had failed to ask permission for their activities.
Revised:  They made a complaint that the , or the "Alliance" for short, had failed to ask permission for their activities.
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Original:  When police and officials from the Food and Environmental Hygiene Department attempted to remove the sculptures on the grounds for obstructing public access, they were prevented from doing so by activists for two hours.
Revised:  When police and officials from the attempted to remove the sculptures on the grounds for obstructing public access, they were prevented from doing so by activists for two hours.
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Original:  The statue was removed and is currently in the custody of the Customs and Excise department (C&ED).
Revised:  The statue was removed and is currently in the custody of the (C&ED).
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Original:  As part of its Basic Law , Hong Kong continues to enjoy western-style liberties within the One country, two systems settlement within China.
Revised:  As part of its , Hong Kong continues to enjoy western-style liberties within the One country, two systems settlement within China.
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Original:  As part of its Basic Law , Hong Kong continues to enjoy western-style liberties within the One country, two systems settlement within China.
Revised:  As part of its Basic Law , Hong Kong continues to enjoy western-style liberties within the settlement within China.
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Original:  In the past political activities that are taboo in China proper have been tolerated by the Special Administrative Region of the People's Republic of China (SAR) authorities
Revised:  In the past political activities that are taboo in China proper have been tolerated by the (SAR) authorities
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Original:  Bangladesh has temporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday , after a man was arrested for uploading offensive content to the website , like Muslim and Prime Minister's cartoons .
Revised:  Bangladesh has temporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday after a man was arrested for uploading offensive content to the website , like Muslim and Prime Minister's cartoons .
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Original:  BSS, a government-run news agency, reported today that a man was arrested today in connection with the posting of satirical images of government leaders.
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Original:  Bangladesh has temporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday  after a man was arrested for uploading offensive content to the website .
Revised:  Bangladeshtemporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday after a man was arrested for uploading offensive content to the website .
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Original:  Bangladesh has temporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday  after a man was arrested for uploading offensive content to the website .
Revised:  Bangladesh has temporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday , after a man was arrested for uploading offensive content to the website .
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Original:  Bangladesh has temporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday  after a man was arrested for uploading offensive content to the website .
Revised:  Bangladesh has temporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday after a man was arrested for uploading content onto it deemed offensive .
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Original:  Other users had reportedly posted other kinds of  offensive content, including anti-religious and pornographic materials.
Revised:  Other users had reportedly posted other kinds of potentially offensive content, including anti-religious and pornographic materials.
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Original:  Bangladeshtemporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday, after a man was arrested for uploading content onto it deemed offensive.
Revised:  Bangladesh temporarily blocked the social networking site Facebook on Saturday, after a man was arrested for uploading content onto it deemed offensive.
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Original: Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu in 2009 On Friday, the 189 Parties to the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty  agreed to a final document calling for steps toward the banning of weapons of mass destruction  in the Middle East.
Revised: Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu in 2009 On Friday, the 189 Parties to the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty agreed to a final resolution calling for steps toward the banning of weapons of mass destruction in the Middle East.
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Original: Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu in 2009 On Friday, the 189 Parties to the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty  agreed to a final document calling for steps toward the banning of weapons of mass destruction  in the Middle East.
Revised: Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu in 2009 On Friday, the 189 Parties to the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty agreed to a final document calling for steps toward the banning of weapons of mass destruction (WMD) in the Middle East.
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Original:  The declaration directs United Nations Secretary-General Ban Ki-Moon to organize a conference of all the Middle East states , including non-signatory parties, Israeland Iran, who are not obligated to follow the terms of the declaration.
Revised:  The resolution directs United Nations Secretary-General Ban Ki-Moon to organize a conference of all the Middle East states , including non-signatory parties, Israeland Iran, who are not obligated to follow the terms of the declaration.
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Original:  The declaration directs United Nations Secretary-General Ban Ki-Moon to organize a conference of all the Middle East states , including non-signatory parties, Israeland Iran, who are not obligated to follow the terms of the declaration.
Revised:  The declaration directs United Nations Secretary-General Ban Ki-Moon to organize a conference of all the Middle East states .
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Original:   In an official statement  , Isreal called the declaration, "  deeply flawed and hypocritical.  ]   
Revised:  In an official statement , " deeply flawed and hypocritical. ] 
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Original:   In an official statement  , Isreal called the declaration, "  deeply flawed and hypocritical.  ]   
Revised:  In an official statement , Isreal called the declaration, " is deeply flawed and hypocritical. ] 
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Original:  Tomáš Kopecký scored the game-winning goal for the Chicago Blackhawks 8:25 into the third period to lift the Blackhawks over the Philadelphia Flyers in Game 1 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Saturday night in Chicago  .
Revised: In ice hockey, Tomáš Kopecký scored the game-winning goal for the Chicago Blackhawks 8:25 into the third period to lift the Blackhawks over the Philadelphia Flyers in Game 1 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Saturday night in Chicago .
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Original:  Tomáš Kopecký scored the game-winning goal for the Chicago Blackhawks 8:25 into the third period to lift the Blackhawks over the Philadelphia Flyers in Game 1 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Saturday night in Chicago  .
Revised:  Tomáš Kopecký scored the game-winning goal for the Chicago Blackhawks 8:25 into the third period to lift the Blackhawks over the Philadelphia Flyers in Game 1 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Saturday night in Chicago , United States .
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Original:  According to media coverage  a mentally disturbed woman, supposedly a 36 year old from Romania, is responsible for the attack.
Revised:  According to media coverage , a mentally disturbed woman, supposedly a 36 year old from Romania, is responsible for the attack.
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Original:  During the evening prayers she attacked Roger with a knife or similar weapon, french sources say.
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Original:  Members of the community report the event with details like this: At the evening prayer, during the first song, the woman joined the kids who like always at these services sat with Frère Roger  .
Revised:  Members of the community have said that at the evening prayer, during the first song, the woman joined the kids who like always at these services sat with Frère Roger .
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Original:  Members of the community report the event with details like this: At the evening prayer, during the first song, the woman joined the kids who like always at these services sat with Frère Roger  .
Revised:  Members of the community report the event with details like this: At the evening prayer, during the first song, the woman joined the kids who sit with Frère Roger .
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Original:  Despite the joined effort of two medical doctors who tended to him immediately, he died from the wounds.
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Original:  One of the brothers of Taizé is a medical doctor, who together with another doctor who was present at the evening service, tried to save the life of Taizé's founder, but didn't succeed .
Revised:  One of the brothers of Taizé , a medical doctor, who together with another doctor who was present at the evening service, tried to save the life of Taizé's founder, but didn't succeed .
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Original:  One of the brothers of Taizé is a medical doctor, who together with another doctor who was present at the evening service, tried to save the life of Taizé's founder, but didn't succeed .
Revised:  One of the brothers of Taizé is a medical doctor, who together with another doctor who was present at the evening service, tried to save the life of Taizé's founder, but didn't succeed and
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Original:  The community  reacted to the shocking events in their own way : While sisters tended to the guests who had been direct eye witnesses, young people took the seats the brothers had left.
Revised:  The community have reacted to the shocking events in their own way : While sisters tended to the guests who had been direct eye witnesses, young people took the seats the brothers had left.
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Original:  The community  reacted to the shocking events in their own way : While sisters tended to the guests who had been direct eye witnesses, young people took the seats the brothers had left.
Revised:  The community reacted to the shocking events in their own way . While sisters tended to the guests who had been direct eye witnesses, young people took the seats the brothers had left.
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Original:  The vehicle, en route to Bangalore ( about 200 kilometres fromk the scene of the accident ) , drove into a police barricade and flipped over, causing the fuel tank to explode and burn the passengers.
Revised:  The vehicle, in route to Bangalore ( about 200 kilometres fromk the scene of the accident ) , drove into a police barricade and flipped over, causing the fuel tank to explode and burn the passengers.
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Original:  The vehicle, en route to Bangalore ( about 200 kilometres fromk the scene of the accident ) , drove into a police barricade and flipped over, causing the fuel tank to explode and burn the passengers.
Revised:  The vehicle, en route to Bangalore , about 200 kilometres fromk the scene of the accident ) , drove into a police barricade and flipped over, causing the fuel tank to explode and burn the passengers.
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