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Original:   US Treasury Secretary Henry Paulson has said that the plan could cost up to $700 billion.
Revised:  The US Treasury Secretary Henry Paulson has said that the plan could cost up to $700 billion.
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Original:  Bush delivering a statement of his support of this bill If it had passed, the bailout plan would allow for the United States government to purchase devalued mortgage backed securities, resulting from the subprime mortgage crisis from troubled financial institutions.
Revised:  Bush delivering a statement of his support of this bill If the bill had passed, the bailout plan would allow for the United States government to purchase devalued mortgage backed securities, resulting from the subprime mortgage crisis from troubled financial institutions.
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Original: The US House of Representatives has rejected a bill on the USD 700 billion bail out of US banks.
Revised: The US House of Representatives rejected a bill on the USD 700 billion bail out of US banks.
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Original:  According to BBC News, congressmen have opposed the bill after receiving 50 times as many letters against the bill as for the bill.
Revised:  According to BBC News, congressmen opposed the bill after receiving 50 times as many letters against the bill as for the bill.
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Original:  "I know many Americans are worrieProxy-Connection: keep-alive Cache-Control: max-age=0 about the cost of the bill, and I understand their concern.
Revised:  "I know many Americans are worried about the cost of the bill, and I understand their concern.
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Original:  Bush delivering a statement of his support of this bill If the bill had passed, the bailout plan would allow for the United States government to purchase devalued mortgage backed securities, resulting from the subprime mortgage crisis from troubled financial institutions.
Revised:  Bush delivering a statement of his support of this bill If passed, the bailout plan would allow for the United States government to purchase devalued mortgage backed securities, resulting from the subprime mortgage crisis from troubled financial institutions.
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Original:  Bush delivering a statement of his support of this bill If the bill had passed, the bailout plan would allow for the United States government to purchase devalued mortgage backed securities, resulting from the subprime mortgage crisis from troubled financial institutions.
Revised:  Bush delivering a statement of his support of this bill If the bill had passed, the bailout plan would have allowed for the United States government to purchase devalued mortgage backed securities, resulting from the subprime mortgage crisis from troubled financial institutions.
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Original: A bus collision with a truck in Uganda has resulted in at least 30 fatalities and has left a furture 21 injured.
Revised: A bus collision with a truck in Uganda has resulted in at least 30 fatalities and has left a further 21 injured.
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Original:  Anglet is near the Spanish border, with the ship registered in Spain  
Revised:  Anglet is near the Spanish border, with the ship registered in Spain . 
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Original: The Luno had 120-160 cubic metres of fuel aboard when it broke down and high winds and waves pushed it into the breakwater.
Revised: The Luno had 120–160 cubic metres of fuel aboard when it broke down and high winds and waves pushed it into the breakwater.
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Original: A sample of fuel oil heated to allow it to flow . Officials in France have issued a pollution alert after an unladen freighter grounded on a breakwater at , yesterday.
Revised: A sample of fuel oil . Officials in France have issued a pollution alert after an unladen freighter grounded on a breakwater at , yesterday.
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Original: Nepal's government has named Shreeya Bajracharya, a six year old, as the country's new  Kumari or 'living goddess' , as part of a century old tradition .
Revised: Nepal's government has named Shreeya Bajracharya, a six year old, as the country's new w: Kumari or 'living goddess' , as part of a century old tradition .
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Original: Nepal's government has named Shreeya Bajracharya, a six year old, as the country's new  Kumari or 'living goddess' , as part of a century old tradition .
Revised: Nepal's government has named Shreeya Bajracharya, a six year old, as the country's new Kumari or 'living goddess' .
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Original:  They are chosen through strict tests of physical attributes, requiring traits like "cow's eyelashes" . Shreeya, a farmer's daughter, said she wants to be a nurse someday .
Revised:  They are chosen through strict tests of physical attributes, and will be worshipped until they lose their status through menstruation . Shreeya, a farmer's daughter, said she wants to be a nurse someday .
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Original:  They are chosen through strict tests of physical attributes, requiring traits like "cow's eyelashes" . Shreeya, a farmer's daughter, said she wants to be a nurse someday .
Revised:  They are chosen through strict tests of physical attributes, requiring traits like "cow's eyelashes" . Shreeya, a farmer's daughter, said she wants to be a nurse someday 
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Original:  Her predecessor resigned due to controversy over her break from tradition, when she traveled to the US to promote a film about herself and Kumaris
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Original:    The girls are revered as divine and are both tourist and worshipper attractions until they have their first menstruation, when they are no longer considered goddesses.
Revised:  The girls are revered as divine and are both tourist and religious attractions until they have their first menstruation, when they are no longer considered goddesses.
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Original:  The final score of the third game was 6-1  
Revised:  The final score of the third game was 6-1 . 
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Original: The main discussion topics werre the end of the embargo to the exportation of bovine and pig Brazilian meats to Russia and the interest of the Russian government in conquering the support of Brazil to enter the World Trade Organization.
Revised: The main discussion topics were the end of the embargo to the exportation of bovine and pig Brazilian meats to Russia and the interest of the Russian government in conquering the support of Brazil to enter the World Trade Organization.
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Original:  Russian has been forbidden the entrance of Brazilian meat in their country because there was a suspection of Brazilian cattle contamination by aftosa fever.
Revised:  Russia has forbidden the entrance of Brazilian meat in their country because there was a suspection of Brazilian cattle contamination by aftosa fever.
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Original:  By other agreement Brazil will teach the Russians techniques of soccer and the Russians go to repass techniques of athletism and swimming
Revised:  By another agreement Brazil will teach the Russians techniques of soccer and the Russians go to repass techniques of athletism and swimming
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Original: Brazilian President Mr Lula and Russian President Mr Putin (Photo::Ricardo Stuckert/PR.) Brasil, November 22, 2004 - President of BrazilMr Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva met President of RussiaMr Vladimir Putin near 12:00 in Brasilia.
Revised: Brazilian President Mr Lula and Russian President Mr Putin (Photo::Ricardo Stuckert/PR.) Brasil, November 22, 2004 - The president of Brazil, Mr. Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva met President of RussiaMr Vladimir Putin near 12:00 in Brasilia.
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Original: Brazilian President Mr Lula and Russian President Mr Putin (Photo::Ricardo Stuckert/PR.) Brasil, November 22, 2004 - President of BrazilMr Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva met President of RussiaMr Vladimir Putin near 12:00 in Brasilia.
Revised: Brazilian President Mr Lula and Russian President Mr Putin (Photo::Ricardo Stuckert/PR.) Brasil, November 22, 2004 - President of BrazilMr Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva , met with the president of Russia, Mr. Vladimir Putin, at about 12:00 in Brasilia.
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Original:  The main discussion topics were the end of the embargo to the exportation of bovine and pig Brazilian meats to Russia and the interest of the Russian government in conquering the support of Brazil to enter the World Trade Organization.
Revised:  The main discussion topics were the end of the embargo on the exportation of bovine and pig Brazilian meats to Russia and the interest of the Russian government in conquering the support of Brazil to enter the World Trade Organization.
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Original:  The main discussion topics were the end of the embargo to the exportation of bovine and pig Brazilian meats to Russia and the interest of the Russian government in conquering the support of Brazil to enter the World Trade Organization.
Revised:  The main discussion topics were the end of the embargo to the exportation of Brazilian meats, from animals such as bovines and pigs, to Russia and the interest of the Russian government in conquering the support of Brazil to enter the World Trade Organization.
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Original: O presidente do Lula do Brasil, déspota cachaceiro, tomou mais uma agora a tarde e disse que vai ficar de porre até cair na rampa do Planalto.
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Original: A former Nebraska teacher that travelled to Mexico with a 13-year-old boy to have sex with him has recieved a sentence of 6 years in prison .
Revised: A former Nebraska teacher has been sentenced to 6 years in prison for traveling to Mexico with a 13-year-old boy to have sex with him has recieved a sentence of 6 years in prison .
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Original: A former Nebraska teacher that travelled to Mexico with a 13-year-old boy to have sex with him has recieved a sentence of 6 years in prison .
Revised: A former Nebraska teacher that travelled to Mexico with a 13-year-old boy to have sex with him .
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Original:  The child was a illegal immigrint at the time and has been put on humantarian parole.
Revised:  The child was a illegal immigrant at the time and has been put on humantarian parole.
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Original:  The child was a illegal immigrint at the time and has been put on humantarian parole.
Revised:  The child was a illegal immigrint at the time and has been put on humanitarian parole.
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Original:  The child's attorney wants to give the boy and his family a visa, and eventually to have citzenship in the U.S
Revised:  The child's attorney wants to give the boy and his family a visa, and eventually to have citizenship in the United States
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Original:  The woman was charged with kidnapping and first degree sexual assault. 
Revised:  Peterson was charged with kidnapping and first degree sexual assault. 
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Original:  Peterson was convicted on federal charges and  may still be prosecuted on state charges.
Revised:  Peterson was convicted on federal charges and she may still be prosecuted on state charges.
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Original:  The woman, Kelsey Peterson, took the boy to Mexico when he was 12 in October 2006 after accusations that she was having an affair with the boy surfaced.
Revised:  The woman, Kelsey Peterson, took the boy to Mexico when he was 12 in October 2006 when accusations that she was having an affair with the boy surfaced.
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Original:  The woman was arrested in Mexico when the boy called his family  .
Revised:  She was arrested in Mexico when the boy called his family .
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Original:  The woman taught a math class at Lexington Middle School in Lexington, Nebraska during the 2005-2006 school year.
Revised:  Peterson taught a math class at Lexington Middle School in Lexington, Nebraska during the 2005-2006 school year.
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Original:  Peterson was charged with kidnapping and first degree sexual assault.
Revised:  She was charged with kidnapping and first degree sexual assault.
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Original:  Peterson claimed that the boy Peterson 's attorney said claimed that the boy's birth certificate was possibly forged or doctored and that the boy was in fact at least 16.
Revised:  Peterson 's attorney said claimed that the boy's birth certificate was possibly forged or doctored and that the boy was in fact at least 16.
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Original:  Given time already served and possibility of good behavior, Peterson could be released in four years.
Revised:  Given time already served and the possibility time-off for of good behavior, Peterson could be released in four years.
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Original:  The child's attorney wants to give the boy and his family a visa , and eventually to have citizenship in the United States
Revised:  The child's attorney wants the boy and his family a visa , and eventually to have citizenship in the United States
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Original:  The child's attorney wants to give the boy and his family a visa , and eventually to have citizenship in the United States
Revised:  The child's attorney wants to give the boy and his family to obtain visas , and eventually to have citizenship in the United States
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Original:  The child's attorney wants to give the boy and his family a visa , and eventually to have citizenship in the United States
Revised:  The child's attorney wants to give the boy and his family a visa , and eventually to become United States citizens
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Original: A former Nebraska teacher has been sentenced to 6 years in prison for traveling to Mexico with a 13-year-old boy with whom she had previously had an affair.
Revised: A former Nebraska teacher has been sentenced to 6 years in prison for traveling to Mexico with a 13-year-old boy with whom she previously had an affair.
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Original:  The woman, Kelsey Peterson , took the boy to Mexico when he was 12 in October 2006 when accusations that she was having an affair with the boy surfaced.
Revised:  Peterson took the boy to Mexico when he was 12 in October 2006 when accusations that she was having an affair with the boy surfaced.
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Original:  The woman, Kelsey Peterson , took the boy to Mexico when he was 12 in October 2006 when accusations that she was having an affair with the boy surfaced.
Revised:  The woman, Kelsey Peterson , took the boy to Mexico in October 2006 when accusations that she was having an affair with the boy surfaced.
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Original:  The woman, Kelsey Peterson , took the boy to Mexico when he was 12 in October 2006 when accusations that she was having an affair with the boy surfaced.
Revised:  The woman, Kelsey Peterson , took the boy to Mexico when he was 12 in October 2006 after accusations that she was having an affair with the boy surfaced.
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Original:  Peterson taught a math class at Lexington Middle School in Lexington, Nebraska during the 2005-2006 school year.
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Original:  Peterson's attorney said claimed that the boy's birth certificate was possibly forged or doctored and that the boy was in fact at least 16.
Revised:  Peterson's attorney claimed that the boy's birth certificate was possibly forged or doctored and that the boy was in fact at least 16.
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Original: A man slashed a woman to death during a burgulary as he stole the woman's $6 to then buy beer with it.
Revised: A man slashed a woman to death during a burglary as he stole the woman's $6 to then buy beer with it.
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Original:  The teenager is currently being held in a juvilnile holding area but he could also face an adult charge.
Revised:  The teenager is currently being held in a juvenile holding area but he could also face an adult charge.
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Original:  The teen exspressed that he enjoyed gory violence and slashings with people getting their tongues taken out.
Revised:  The teen expressed that he enjoyed gory violence and slashings with people getting their tongues taken out.
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Original: A man slashed a woman to death during a burglary as he stole the woman's $6 to then buy beerwith it.
Revised: A man slashed a woman to death as he attempted to steal $6 to then buy beerwith it.
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Original:  The teenager who commited the crime is now facing a first degree murder charge of the death of the 58 year old woman.
Revised:  The teenager who commited the crime is now facing a first degree murder charge over the death of the 58 year old woman.
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Original:  The teenager who commited the crime is now facing a first degree murder charge of the death of the 58 year old woman.
Revised:  The teenager who commited the crime is now facing a first degree murder charge of the death of 58 year old woman.
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Original:  The teen also made a acqsition that he had also killed someone in the past and he has a rule for when he breaks into a persons house he must kill that person as he told police.
Revised:  One witness told police that the teenager claimed to have killed before and also that " he has a rule for when he breaks into a persons house he must kill that person as he told police.
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Original:  A teenager slashed a woman to death as he attempted to steal $6 off her -- to buy beer.
Revised: review)) A teenager slashed a woman to death as he attempted to steal $6 off her -- to buy beer.
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Original: review)) A teenager slashed a woman to death as he attempted to steal $6 off her -- to buy beer.
Revised:  A teenager slashed a woman to death as he attempted to steal $6 off her -- to buy beer.
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Original:  A teenager slashed a woman to death as he attempted to steal $6 off her -- to buy beer.
Revised:  A teenager slashed a woman to death as he attempted to steal $6 off her — to buy beer.
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Original:  The 16 year old boy, Alan Tanguay, now faces a first degree murder charge over the death of 58 year old Patricia Kaliszeski from Palm Bay, Florida.
Revised:  The 16-year-old boy, Alan Tanguay, now faces a first degree murder charge over the death of 58 year old Patricia Kaliszeski from Palm Bay, Florida.
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Original:  The 16 year old boy, Alan Tanguay, now faces a first degree murder charge over the death of 58 year old Patricia Kaliszeski from Palm Bay, Florida.
Revised:  The 16 year old boy, Alan Tanguay, now faces a first degree murder charge over the death of 58-year-old Patricia Kaliszeski from Palm Bay, Florida.
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Original:  Tanguay told investigators he was approached by Kaliszeski with a knife as he was burgling the house.
Revised:  clark told investigators he was approached by Kaliszeski with a knife as he was burgling the house.
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Original:   "The 23,000-ton vessel was also carrying tens of thousands of pounds of commercial insecticide and many bodies still remain trapped inside the wreckage" according to a recent press release from the ICMP. "The NBI, through its Disaster Victim Identification team, was tasked [with identifying] the victims of this tragedy.
Revised:  "The 23,000-ton vessel was also carrying tens of thousands of pounds of commercial insecticide and many bodies still remain trapped inside the wreckage" according to a recent press release from the ICMP. "The NBI, through its DVI team, was tasked [with identifying] the victims of this tragedy.
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Original:  There are 10,000 courts accross the country.
Revised:  There are 10,000 courts across the country.
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Original:  The investigations into the 1994 Rwandan genocide should be completed by the end of July, according to a spokesperson for the traditional Gacaca courts.
Revised: Rwandan genoice - skulls The investigations into the 1994 Rwandan genocide should be completed by the end of July, according to a spokesperson for the traditional Gacaca courts.
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Original: Rwandan genoice - skulls The investigations into the 1994 Rwandan genocide should be completed by the end of July, according to a spokesperson for the traditional Gacaca courts.
Revised: Rwandan genocide - skulls The investigations into the 1994 Rwandan genocide should be completed by the end of July, according to a spokesperson for the traditional Gacaca courts.
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Original:  It is estimated that the 1994 Rwandan genocide resulted in the deaths of up to 1,000,000 people.
Revised:  The 1994 Rwandan genocide resulted in the deaths of up to 1,000,000 people.
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Original: The 1994 Rwandan genocie was an eruption of ethnic conflict where Hutu militia, supported by the Hutu dominated government  , attempted to ethnically cleanse the minority Tutsi.
Revised: The 1994 Rwandan genocide was an eruption of ethnic conflict where Hutu militia, supported by the Hutu dominated government , attempted to ethnically cleanse the minority Tutsi.
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Original:  The courts were set up three years ago, however so far their time has been taken up with trial runs.
Revised: Kigali, Rwanda The courts were set up three years ago, however so far their time has been taken up with trial runs.
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Original:  Kigali, Rwanda The 1994 Rwandan genocide was an eruption of ethnic conflict where Hutu militia, supported by the Hutu dominated government and encouraged by 'hate radio', attempted to ethnically cleanse the minority Tutsi.
Revised:  The 1994 Rwandan genocide was an eruption of ethnic conflict where Hutu militia, supported by the Hutu dominated government and encouraged by 'hate radio', attempted to ethnically cleanse the minority Tutsi.
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Original: Rwandan genocide - skullsKigali, Rwanda The investigations into the 1994 should be completed by the end of July, according to a spokesperson for the traditional .
Revised: Rwandan genocide - skulls The investigations into the 1994 should be completed by the end of July, according to a spokesperson for the traditional .
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Original:  Most of the injured have been shifted to the nearest hospital , Appeals were being made for the remaining pilgrims to  calm and peaceful.
Revised:  Most of the injured have been transported to the nearest hospital , Appeals were being made for the remaining pilgrims to calm and peaceful.
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Original:  Most of the injured have been shifted to the nearest hospital , Appeals were being made for the remaining pilgrims to  calm and peaceful.
Revised:  Most of the injured have been shifted to the nearest hospital and appeals were being made for the remaining pilgrims to calm and peaceful.
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Original:  Most of the injured have been shifted to the nearest hospital , Appeals were being made for the remaining pilgrims to  calm and peaceful.
Revised:  Most of the injured have been shifted to the nearest hospital , Appeals were being made for the remaining pilgrims to be calm and peaceful.
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Original: Hundreds of people died in a massive stampede at a the Chamunda Devi temple Jodhpur,  the western state of Rajasthan, India.
Revised: Hundreds of people died in a massive stampede at the Chamunda Devi temple Jodhpur, the western state of Rajasthan, India.
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Original: Hundreds of people died in a massive stampede at a the Chamunda Devi temple Jodhpur,  the western state of Rajasthan, India.
Revised: Hundreds of people died in a massive stampede at a the Chamunda Devi temple Jodhpur, in the western state of Rajasthan, India.
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Original:  A temple wall collapsed, causing panic among ten of thousands of gathered Hindu worshipers who then began to run for safety, causing the stampede.
Revised:  A temple wall collapsed, causing panic among ten of thousands of gathered Hindu worshippers who then began to run for safety, causing the stampede.
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