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Original:  The tide turned in favour of the English, and the Second Desmond Rebellion was ended in 1583, when the Earl of Desmond and his followers had been hunted down and killed by the English and the Irish clans who once fought beneath the banner of the Earl.
Revised:  The tide turned in favour of the English, and the Second Desmond Rebellion was ended in 1583, when the Earl of Desmond and his followers had been hunted down and killed by the English and the Irish clans who had once willingly risen and fought beneath the banner of the Earl.
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Original:  The tide turned in favour of the English, and the Second Desmond Rebellion was ended in 1583, when the Earl of Desmond and his followers had been hunted down and killed by the English and the Irish clans who once fought beneath the banner of the Earl.
Revised:  The tide turned in favour of the English, and the Second Desmond Rebellion was ended in 1583, when the Earl of Desmond and his followers had been hunted down and killed by the English and the Irish clans who once fought beneath the banners of the Earl.
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Original:  Since the death of Silken Thomas, James FitzMaurice the first Irish clan chief to use the ongoing religious persecution of English and Irish Catholics as a reason for war against the House of Tudor.
Revised:  Since the beheading of Silken Thomas, James FitzMaurice the first Irish clan chief to use the ongoing religious persecution of English and Irish Catholics as a reason for war against the House of Tudor.
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Original: Since the beheading of Silken Thomas  , James FitzMaurice  the first Irish clan chief to use the ongoing religious persecution of English and Irish Catholics as a reason for war against the House of Tudor.
Revised: Since the beheading of Silken Thomas , James FitzMaurice was the first Irish clan chief to use the ongoing religious persecution of English and Irish Catholics as a reason for war against the House of Tudor.
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Original: Since the beheading of Silken Thomas  , James FitzMaurice  the first Irish clan chief to use the ongoing religious persecution of English and Irish Catholics as a reason for war against the House of Tudor.
Revised: Since the beheading of Silken Thomas , James FitzMaurice the first Irish clan chief to use the ongoing religious persecution of English and Irish Catholics as a grounds for war against the House of Tudor.
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Original:  Hugh O'Neill and Red Hugh O'Donnell may have been inspired by James Fitzmaurice for  the Nine Years War.
Revised:  Hugh O'Neill and Red Hugh O'Donnell may have been inspired by James Fitzmaurice for their uprising, which became known as the Nine Years War.
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Original: Louisa Baileche (born 4 January 1977) is a singer, dancer and performer and has achieved success in a variety of artistic genres.
Revised: Louisa Baïleche (born 4 January 1977) is a singer, dancer and performer and has achieved success in a variety of artistic genres.
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Original:  Louisa Baileche has performed on the Comédie Française stage as well as the famous Folies Bergères , in a French version of the musical "Nine" .
Revised:  Louisa Baïleche has performed on the Comédie Française stage as well as the famous Folies Bergères , in a French version of the musical "Nine" .
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Original:  Louisa Baileche has performed on the Comédie Française stage as well as the famous Folies Bergères , in a French version of the musical "Nine" .
Revised:  Louisa Baileche has performed on the Comédie-Française stage as well as the famous Folies Bergères , in a French version of the musical "Nine" .
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Original:  Louisa Baileche has performed on the Comédie Française stage as well as the famous Folies Bergères , in a French version of the musical "Nine" .
Revised:  Louisa Baileche has performed on the Comédie Française stage as well as the Folies Bergère , in a French version of the musical "Nine" .
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Original:  Louisa Baileche has performed on the Comédie Française stage as well as the famous Folies Bergères , in a French version of the musical "Nine" .
Revised:  Louisa Baileche has performed on the Comédie Française stage as well as the famous Folies Bergères , in a French version of the musical Nine .
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Original: Louisa Baïleche (born 4 January 1977) is a singer, dancer and performer and has achieved success in a variety of artistic genres.
Revised: Louisa Baïleche is a singer, dancer and performer and has achieved success in a variety of artistic genres.
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Original: Louisa Baïleche (born 4 January 1977) is a singer, dancer and performer and has achieved success in a variety of artistic genres.
Revised: Louisa Baïleche (born 4 January 1977) is a singer, dancer and performer in a variety of artistic genres.
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Original: French Resistance members Category:Red Orchestra (espionage) Category:Members of the Front National (French Resistance) movement Category: French military personnel of World War I Category:French people of the Spanish Civil War Category:French prisoners of war in World War I Category:World War I prisoners of war held by Germany Category:French Communist Party politicians Category:Burials at Père Lachaise Cemetery Category:Senators of Seine Category:Senators of Seine-Saint-Den
Revised: French Resistance members Category:Red Orchestra (espionage) Category:Members of the Front National (French Resistance) movement Category: French military personnel of World War I Category:French prisoners of war in World War I Category:World War I prisoners of war held by Germany Category:French Communist Party politicians Category:Burials at Père Lachaise Cemetery Category:Senators of Seine Category:Senators of Seine-Saint-Den
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Original: French Resistance members Category:Red Orchestra (espionage) Category:Members of the Front National (French Resistance) movement Category: French military personnel of World War I Category:French people of the Spanish Civil War Category:French prisoners of war in World War I Category:World War I prisoners of war held by Germany Category:French Communist Party politicians Category:Burials at Père Lachaise Cemetery Category:Senators of Seine Category:Senators of Seine-Saint-Den
Revised: French Resistance members Category:Red Orchestra (espionage) Category:Members of the Front National (French Resistance) movement Category: French military personnel of World War I Category:French people of the Spanish Civil War Category:French prisoners of war in World War I Category:World War I prisoners of war held by Germany Category:French people of the Spanish Civil War Category:French Resistance members Category:Red Orchestra (espionage) Category:Members of the Front National (French Resistance) movement Category:Burials at Père Lachaise Cemetery Category:Senators of Seine Category:Senators of Seine-Saint-Den
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Original: French Resistance members Category:Red Orchestra (espionage) Category:Members of the Front National (French Resistance) movement Category: French military personnel of World War I Category:French people of the Spanish Civil War Category:French prisoners of war in World War I Category:World War I prisoners of war held by Germany Category:French Communist Party politicians Category:Burials at Père Lachaise Cemetery Category:Senators of Seine Category:Senators of Seine-Saint-Den
Revised: French Resistance members Category:Red Orchestra (espionage) Category:Members of the Front National (French Resistance) movement Category: French military personnel of World War I Category:French people of the Spanish Civil War Category:French prisoners of war in World War I Category:World War I prisoners of war held by Germany Category:French Communist Party politicians Category:Burials at Père Lachaise Cemete
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Original:  the published article was a French translation of the Russian original  .Klehr, Harvey, Haynes, John Earl and Kyrill M. Anderson.
Revised:  the published article was a French translation of the Russian original ) .Klehr, Harvey, Haynes, John Earl and Kyrill M. Anderson.
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Original:  Jacques Duclos (2 October 1896  in Louey, Hautes-Pyrénées – 25 April 1975  in Montreuil) was a French Communist politician who played a key role in French politics from 1926, when he entered the French National Assembly after defeating Paul Reynaud, until 1969, when he won a substantial portion of the vote in the presidential elections.
Revised:  Jacques Duclos (2 October 1896 , in Louey, Hautes-Pyrénées – 25 April 1975 in Montreuil) was a French Communist politician who played a key role in French politics from 1926, when he entered the French National Assembly after defeating Paul Reynaud, until 1969, when he won a substantial portion of the vote in the presidential elections.
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Original:  Jacques Duclos (2 October 1896  in Louey, Hautes-Pyrénées – 25 April 1975  in Montreuil) was a French Communist politician who played a key role in French politics from 1926, when he entered the French National Assembly after defeating Paul Reynaud, until 1969, when he won a substantial portion of the vote in the presidential elections.
Revised:  Jacques Duclos (2 October 1896 in Louey, Hautes-Pyrénées – 25 April 1975 , in Montreuil) was a French Communist politician who played a key role in French politics from 1926, when he entered the French National Assembly after defeating Paul Reynaud, until 1969, when he won a substantial portion of the vote in the presidential elections.
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Original:  Jacques Duclos (2 October 1896, in Louey, Hautes-Pyrénées – 25 April 1975 , in Montreuil ) was a French Communist politician who played a key role in French politics from 1926, when he entered the French National Assembly after defeating Paul Reynaud, until 1969, when he won a substantial portion of the vote in the presidential elections.
Revised:  Jacques Duclos (2 October 189625 April 1975 , in Montreuil ) was a French Communist politician who played a key role in French politics from 1926, when he entered the French National Assembly after defeating Paul Reynaud, until 1969, when he won a substantial portion of the vote in the presidential elections.
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Original:  Jacques Duclos (2 October 1896, in Louey, Hautes-Pyrénées – 25 April 1975 , in Montreuil ) was a French Communist politician who played a key role in French politics from 1926, when he entered the French National Assembly after defeating Paul Reynaud, until 1969, when he won a substantial portion of the vote in the presidential elections.
Revised:  Jacques Duclos (2 October 1896, in Louey, Hautes-Pyrénées – 25 April 1975 ) was a French Communist politician who played a key role in French politics from 1926, when he entered the French National Assembly after defeating Paul Reynaud, until 1969, when he won a substantial portion of the vote in the presidential elections.
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Original:  The negotiations did not succeed but discredited the PCF's post-war credibility among many members of the masses .
Revised:  The negotiations did not succeed but hurt the PCF's post-war credibility among many members of the masses .
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Original:  The negotiations did not succeed but discredited the PCF's post-war credibility among many members of the masses .
Revised:  The negotiations did not succeed but discredited the PCF's post-war credibility among the populace .
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Original:  56-86\% of orbital lymphomas are classified PCNSL and 15-25\% are classified PCNSLO. PCNSLO is common in people who are severely immunosuppressed.
Revised:  56-86\% of orbital lymphomas are classified PCNSL and 15-25\% are classified PCNSLO. 
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Original:  The arrival of Americans during the Second World War, with their informal habits and relative wealth,contributed to the rise of nationalism in the islands.
Revised:  During the Second World War, with their informal habits and relative wealth,contributed to the rise of nationalism in the islands.
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Original:  In their book, Vanuatu by Jocelyn Harewood and Michelle Bennett, is this memorable passage referring to the 1920s: "Drunken plantation owners used to gamble... using the ` years of labour' of their Melanesian workers as currency.
Revised:  In their book, Vanuatu by Jocelyn Harewood and Michelle Bennett, is this memorable passage referring to the 1920s: "Drunken plantation owners used to gamble... using the ' years of labour' of their Melanesian workers as currency.
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Original:  Farida Khanum performance on YouTube Retrieved 21 June 2018 The ghazal she is most associated with is Aaj Jaane Ki Zidd Naa Karo written by the famous poet Fayyaz Hashmi.
Revised:  The ghazal she is most associated with is Aaj Jaane Ki Zidd Naa Karo written by the famous poet Fayyaz Hashmi.
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Original:  Awards and recognition Hilal-i-Imtiaz  by the President of Pakistan in 2005 Pride of Performance Award by the President of Pakistan in 1970 Hafiz Ali Khan Award in India (2005) Malika-e-Ghazal (Queen of Ghazal) by The Times of India (2007) Retrieved 21 June 2018Profile of Farida Khanum on Coke Studio (Pakistan) website Retrieved 20 June 2018
Revised:  Awards and recognition Hilal-i-Imtiaz by the President of Pakistan in 2005 Pride of Performance Award by the President of Pakistan in 1970 Hafiz Ali Khan Award in India (2005) Malika-e-Ghazal (Queen of Ghazal) by The Times of India (2007) Profile of Farida Khanum on Coke Studio (Pakistan) website Retrieved 20 June 2018
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Original:   Family Father: Taksi, Xianzu (;
Revised: Physical Appearance Family Father: Taksi, Xianzu (;
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Original:  1564 – 25 September 1611), was a Jurchen leader, a member of the Aisin Gioro clan, he was a younger brother of Nurhaci, the founder of the Later Jin dynasty, of what would become the Qing dynasty.
Revised:  1564 – 25 September 1611), was a Jurchen leader, a member of the Aisin Gioro clan, he was a younger brother of Nurhaci, the founder of the Later Jin dynasty, the predecessor of the Qing dynasty.
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Original:  Elements of the rebellion continued until
Revised:  Elements of the rebellion continued continued sporadically until 1903.
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Original: Execution of Rainandriamampandry and Ratsimamanga The Menalamba rebellion was an uprising in Madagascar by the Sakalava people that emerged in central Madagascar in response to the French capture of the royal palace in the capital city of Antananarivo in September 1895. it spread rapidly in 1896, threatening the capital, but French forces were successful in securing the surrender of many rebel groups in 1897.
Revised:  The Menalamba rebellion was an uprising in Madagascar by the Sakalava people that emerged in central Madagascar in response to the French capture of the royal palace in the capital city of Antananarivo in September 1895. it spread rapidly in 1896, threatening the capital, but French forces were successful in securing the surrender of many rebel groups in 1897.
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Original:  It was created by Prof.
Revised:  It was created by 
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Original:  In 2013, Cornell University joined as co-publisher, with Professor Dutta representing the GII at Cornell University and Bruno Lanvin at INSEAD.
Revised:  In 2013, Cornell University joined as co-publisher, with Dutta representing the GII at Cornell University and Bruno Lanvin at INSEAD.
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Original:  Eurostat; and URL URL URL expenditure on R%DIFDELCMD < &%%% D, \% GDPTotal domestic intramural expenditure on R D during a given period as a percentage of GDP.
Revised:  Eurostat; and URL URL URL expenditure on R%DIFDELCMD < &%%% D during a given period as a percentage of GDP.
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Original:  Eurostat; and URL URL URL financed by business, \%Gross expenditure on R D financed by business enterprise as a percentage of total gross expenditure on R%DIFDELCMD < &%%% D.
Revised:  Eurostat; and URL URL URL financed by business, \%Gross expenditure on R %DIFDELCMD < &%%% D.
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Original:  URL R D collaboration†Based on the survey question: In your country, to what extent do businesses and universities collaborate on research and development (R%DIFDELCMD < &%%% D)?
Revised:  URL R %DIFDELCMD < &%%% D)?
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Original: Framework showing the elements of the Index The Global Innovation Index (GII) published by the World Intellectual Property Organization (WIPO) is an annual ranking of countries by their capacity for, and success in, innovation.
Revised: Framework showing the elements of the Index The Global Innovation Index is an annual ranking of countries by their capacity for, and success in, innovation.
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Original:  URL Vietnamese Government makes reference to the GII in its resolution No. 01/NQ-CP dated January 2021 on solutions for implementation of socio economic development plan in 2021: URL The GII has also been recognized by the UN General Assembly in its 2019 resolution on Science, Technology and Innovation for Sustainable Development as a benchmark for measuring innovation in relation to the Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) .
Revised:  URL Vietnamese Government makes reference to the GII in its resolution No. 01/NQ-CP dated January 2021 on solutions for implementation of socio economic development plan in 2021: URL The GII has also been recognized by the UN General Assembly in its 2019 resolution on Science, Technology and Innovation for Sustainable Development as a benchmark for measuring innovation in relation to the Sustainable Development Goals .
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Original:  Methodology The overall GII ranking is built based on two sub-indices that are both equally important in presenting a complete picture of innovation:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Innovation Input Sub-Index: Five input pillars capture elements of the economy that enable and facilitate innovative activities.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Innovation Input Sub-Index: Five input pillars capture elements of the economy that enable and facilitate innovative activities.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The GII has been criticized for giving excessive significance attributed to factors that aren’t integral to innovation.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The index has been criticized for giving excessive significance attributed to factors that aren’t integral to innovation.
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Original:  File:HM Norodom Sihanouk with U.S. President Reagan (1988).jpg|Prince Norodom Sihanouk, as the internationally-recognised leader of Cambodia, pictured with US President Ronald Reagan in the Oval Office, 11 October 1988.
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Original: International recognition [[File:HM Norodom Sihanouk with U.S. President Reagan (1988).jpg|Prince Norodom Sihanouk, as the internationally-recognised leader of Cambodia, pictured with US President Ronald Reagan in the Oval Office, 11 October 1988.]] The signing ceremony of the coalition took place in Kuala Lumpur on 22 June 1982.
Revised: International recognition [[File:HM Norodom Sihanouk with U.S. President Reagan (1988).jpg|Prince Norodom Sihanouk, as the internationally recognised leader of Cambodia, pictured with US President Ronald Reagan in the Oval Office, 11 October 1988.]] The signing ceremony of the coalition took place in Kuala Lumpur on 22 June 1982.
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Original:  , Rodthaphibeal Cheate nei Kampouchea ) from 1990, was a coalition government in exile composed of three Cambodian political factions, namely Prince Norodom Sihanouk's FUNCINPEC party, the Party of Democratic Kampuchea (PDK;
Revised:  , Roathaphibal Cheat Ney Kampuchea ) from 1990, was a coalition government in exile composed of three Cambodian political factions, namely Prince Norodom Sihanouk's FUNCINPEC party, the Party of Democratic Kampuchea (PDK;
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Original: International recognition [[File:HM Norodom Sihanouk with U.S. President Reagan (1988).jpg|Prince Norodom Sihanouk, as the internationally recognised leader of Cambodia, pictured with US President Ronald Reagan in the Oval Office, 11 October 1988.]] The signing ceremony of the coalition took place in Kuala Lumpur on 22 June 1982.
Revised: International recognition [[File:HM Norodom Sihanouk with U.S. President Reagan (1988).jpg|Prince Norodom Sihanouk, for many the recognised leader of Cambodia, pictured with US President Ronald Reagan in the Oval Office, 11 October 1988.]] The signing ceremony of the coalition took place in Kuala Lumpur on 22 June 1982.
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Original:  The CGDK was allowed to retain the Cambodian/Kampuchean seat in the United Nations on the premise that it was a legitimate Cambodian government in contrast to the pro-Vietnamese People's Republic of Kampuchea regime (the Western states had previously opposed proposals by the Eastern Bloc countries to replace the Khmer Rouge-held seat of Cambodia by the representation of the Vietnamese-installed regime ).
Revised:  The CGDK was allowed to retain the Cambodian/Kampuchean seat in the United Nations on the premise that it was a legitimate Cambodian government in contrast to the pro-Vietnamese People's Republic of Kampuchea regime . The Western states had previously opposed proposals by the Eastern Bloc countries to replace the Khmer Rouge-held seat of Cambodia by the representation of the Vietnamese-installed regime ).
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Original:  , Roathaphibal Cheat Ney Kampuchea) from 1990 , was a coalition government in exile composed of three Cambodian political factions, namely Prince Norodom Sihanouk's FUNCINPEC party, the Party of Democratic Kampuchea (PDK;
Revised:  , Roathaphibal Cheat Ney Kampuchea) , was a coalition government in exile composed of three Cambodian political factions, namely Prince Norodom Sihanouk's FUNCINPEC party, the Party of Democratic Kampuchea (PDK;
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Original:  Organizations such as the American Red Cross, United States Coast Guard and United States Department of Commerce educate and promote safe water practices.
Revised:  Organizations such as the American Red Cross, 
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Original:  Recommendations for adults include the following  safe pool practices : Install a locked barrier around your pool or a locked covering when not in use, swim with a partner or be supervised while swimming, avoid drinking alcohol while swimming, do not dive head first into a body of water without knowing the depth, learn to swim before entering a body of water and wear flotation devises.
Revised:  Recommendations for adults include the following safe pool practices 
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Original:  Boating According to the United States Coast guard, in 2017 there were over 4 , 000 boating related accidents.
Revised:  , 000 boating related accidents.
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Original:  Weather.Gov has created a "Turn around and don't Drown" campaign to educate people on the danger of driving into flood waters .
Revised:  Weather.Gov has created a "Turn around and don't Drown" campaign , which educates people on the danger of driving into flood waters .
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Original: Water safety refers to the procedures, precautions and policies associated with safety in, on, and around bodies of water, where there is a risk of injury or drowning.
Revised: Water safety refers to the procedures, dodoprecautions and policies associated with safety in, on, and around bodies of water, where there is a risk of injury or drowning.
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Original:  No American warships ships were stationed at Curaçao on 23 July when a French fleet arrived from Guadeloupe, consisting of 5 ships and 1,400 troops, sailors and Guadeloupean militia.
Revised:  No American warships were stationed at Curaçao on 23 July when a French fleet arrived from Guadeloupe, consisting of 5 ships and 1,400 troops, sailors and Guadeloupean militia.
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