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Original:  The outcome was a cascade of new perspectives on work, many of which were described by Ronnie Lessem in his series of books on Intrapreneurship, URL and URL Work on Vision was one of the centre's earliest achievements at the beginning of the 1970s.
Revised:  The outcome was a cascade of new perspectives on work, many of which were described by Ronnie Lessem in his series of books on URL URL and URL Work on Vision was one of the centre's earliest achievements at the beginning of the 1970s.
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Original: The first Centre for Human Communication was founded in 1971 by Kevin Kingsland, Kevin URL a member of the Publications & Communications Board of the British Psychological Society and Venika Kingsland in Devon, England, to provide an intentional centre for personal and community development.
Revised: The first Centre for Human Communication was founded in 1971 by Kevin Kingsland, a member of the Publications & Communications Board of the British Psychological Society and Venika Kingsland in Devon, England, to provide an intentional centre for personal and community development.
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Original:  The original Vision to URL model (later also called Vision to Reality) was invented at this time by Kevin Kingsland and shared through hundreds of seminars and communication groups.
Revised:  The original Vision to Action model (later also called Vision to Reality) was invented at this time by Kevin Kingsland and shared through hundreds of seminars and communication groups.
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Original:  consists of four diagnostic types in which such individuals are categorised according to the main source of their dear regarding dental treatment Type 1: simple conditioned phobia—fear of dental procedures Type 2: fear of catastrophe—anxiety about somatic reactions during dental treatment, e.g. fainting, panic attack, heart attack Type 3: Generalized anxiety—nervous person in general Type 4: distrust of dentists—fear of the dentist
Revised:  consists of four diagnostic types in which such individuals are categorised according to the main source of their fear regarding dental treatment Type 1: simple conditioned phobia—fear of dental procedures Type 2: fear of catastrophe—anxiety about somatic reactions during dental treatment, e.g. fainting, panic attack, heart attack Type 3: Generalized anxiety—nervous person in general Type 4: distrust of dentists—fear of the dentist
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Original:  Pain and fear are integral parts of this mechanism.
Revised:  For sentient organisms, pain and fear are integral parts of this mechanism.
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Original:  Organisms also evolve while adapting - even thriving - in a benign environment (for example, a marine sponge modifies its structure in response to current changes, in order to better absorb and process nutrients).
Revised:  Organisms also evolve while adaptingeven thrivingin a benign environment (for example, a marine sponge modifies its structure in response to current changes, in order to better absorb and process nutrients).
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Original:  Self-destructive behavior An interesting phenomenon sometimes occurs in social animals.
Revised:  Self-destructive behavior 
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Original:  Self-destructive behavior is not the same as risk-taking behavior (see below in Social implications), although risk taking behavior could turn into destructive behavior.
Revised:  Self-destructive behavior is not the same as risk-taking behavior (see below in Social implications), although risk-taking behavior could turn into destructive behavior.
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Original:  The instinct that drives us to gather resources now drives us to over-consumption or to patterns of collection and possession that essentially make hoarding resources the priority.
Revised:  The instinct that drives humans to gather resources now drives us to over-consumption or to patterns of collection and possession that essentially make hoarding resources the priority.
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Original:  The instinct that drives us to gather resources now drives us to over-consumption or to patterns of collection and possession that essentially make hoarding resources the priority.
Revised:  The instinct that drives us to gather resources now drives them to over-consumption or to patterns of collection and possession that essentially make hoarding resources the priority.
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Original:  Cellular self preservation Self-preservation is not just limited to individual organisms , this can be scaled up or down to other levels of life.
Revised:  Cellular self preservation Self-preservation is not just limited to individual organisms ; this can be scaled up or down to other levels of life.
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Original:  In addition, when a myocardiac arrest - a heart attack - occurs , it is actually the cardiac myocytes entering a state of hibernation in an attempt to wait out a lack of resources.
Revised:  In addition, when a myocardiac arresta heart attackoccurs , it is actually the cardiac myocytes entering a state of hibernation in an attempt to wait out a lack of resources.
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Original:  He makes an analogy between the survival practices such as hygiene and the ritual nature of within small human groups or the nations that engage in religious warfare with the complex survival mechanisms of multi-cellular organisms that evolved from the cooperative association of single cell organisms in order to better protect themselves.
Revised:  He makes an analogy between the survival practices such as hygiene and the ritual nature within small human groups or the nations that engage in religious warfare with the complex survival mechanisms of multi-cellular organisms that evolved from the cooperative association of single cell organisms in order to better protect themselves.
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Original:  It is  universal among all living organisms.
Revised:  It is thought to be universal among all living organisms.
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Original:  Significantly higher mortality was reported for Cefepime compared to all other antibiotics combined.
Revised:  Significantly higher mortality was reported for cefepime compared to all other antibiotics combined.
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Original:  Piperacillin ‐ tazobactam resulted in lower mortality than other antibiotics.
Revised:  Piperacillin / tazobactam resulted in lower mortality than other antibiotics.
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Original: In the case of a retrospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow patients up as is the case with a prospective study .
Revised: In the case of a retrospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow up with patients over a long period of time ( as is the case with a prospective study .
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Original: In the case of a retrospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow patients up as is the case with a prospective study .
Revised: In the case of a retrospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow patients up as is the case in a prospective cohort study) .
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Original:  is a longitudinal cohort study that studies a cohort of individuals that share a common exposure factor to determine its influence on the development of a disease,
Revised:  is a longitudinal cohort study used in medical and psychological research. A cohort of individuals that share a common exposure factor to determine its influence on the development of a disease,
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Original:  and are compared to another group of equivalent individuals that were not exposed to that factor  . Retrospective cohort studies have existed for approximately as long as prospective cohort URL Design It is a medical and psychological research study in which the records of groups of individuals who are alike in many ways but differ by a certain characteristic (for example, female nurses who smoke and those who do not smoke) are compared for a particular outcome (such as lung cancer).
Revised:  and are compared to another group of equivalent individuals not exposed to that factor . Retrospective cohort studies have existed for approximately as long as prospective cohort URL Design It is a medical and psychological research study in which the records of groups of individuals who are alike in many ways but differ by a certain characteristic (for example, female nurses who smoke and those who do not smoke) are compared for a particular outcome (such as lung cancer).
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Original:  and are compared to another group of equivalent individuals that were not exposed to that factor  . Retrospective cohort studies have existed for approximately as long as prospective cohort URL Design It is a medical and psychological research study in which the records of groups of individuals who are alike in many ways but differ by a certain characteristic (for example, female nurses who smoke and those who do not smoke) are compared for a particular outcome (such as lung cancer).
Revised:  and are compared to another group of equivalent individuals that were not exposed to that factor . Retrospective cohort studies have existed for approximately as long as prospective cohort URL Design The retrospective cohort study compares groups of individuals who are alike in many ways but differ by a certain characteristic (for example, female nurses who smoke and those who do not smoke) are compared for a particular outcome (such as lung cancer).
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Original:  and are compared to another group of equivalent individuals that were not exposed to that factor  . Retrospective cohort studies have existed for approximately as long as prospective cohort URL Design It is a medical and psychological research study in which the records of groups of individuals who are alike in many ways but differ by a certain characteristic (for example, female nurses who smoke and those who do not smoke) are compared for a particular outcome (such as lung cancer).
Revised:  and are compared to another group of equivalent individuals that were not exposed to that factor . Retrospective cohort studies have existed for approximately as long as prospective cohort URL Design It is a medical and psychological research study in which the records of groups of individuals who are alike in many ways but differ by a certain characteristic (for example, female nurses who smoke and ones who do not smoke) are compared for a particular outcome (such as lung cancer).
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Original:  and are compared to another group of equivalent individuals that were not exposed to that factor  . Retrospective cohort studies have existed for approximately as long as prospective cohort URL Design It is a medical and psychological research study in which the records of groups of individuals who are alike in many ways but differ by a certain characteristic (for example, female nurses who smoke and those who do not smoke) are compared for a particular outcome (such as lung cancer).
Revised:  and are compared to another group of equivalent individuals that were not exposed to that factor . Retrospective cohort studies have existed for approximately as long as prospective cohort URL Design It is a medical and psychological research study in which the records of groups of individuals who are alike in many ways but differ by a certain characteristic (for example, female nurses who smoke and those who do not smoke) in terms of a particular outcome (such as lung cancer).
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Original:  In retrospective cohort studies, a risk ratio or odds ratio gives an assessment of relative URL In the case of a retrospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow up with patients over a long period of time (as is the case in a prospective cohort study ) . However,  the starting point of this study is the same as for all cohort studies .
Revised:  In retrospective cohort studies, a risk ratio or odds ratio . In the case of a retrospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow up with patients over a long period of time (as is the case in a prospective cohort study ) . However, the starting point of this study is the same as for all cohort studies .
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Original:  In retrospective cohort studies, a risk ratio or odds ratio gives an assessment of relative URL In the case of a retrospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow up with patients over a long period of time (as is the case in a prospective cohort study ) . However,  the starting point of this study is the same as for all cohort studies .
Revised:  In retrospective cohort studies, a risk ratio or odds ratio gives an assessment of relative URL This is fundamentally the same methodology as for a prospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow up with patients over a long period of time (as is the case in a prospective cohort study ) . However, the starting point of this study is the same as for all cohort studies .
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Original:  In retrospective cohort studies, a risk ratio or odds ratio gives an assessment of relative URL In the case of a retrospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow up with patients over a long period of time (as is the case in a prospective cohort study ) . However,  the starting point of this study is the same as for all cohort studies .
Revised:  In retrospective cohort studies, a risk ratio or odds ratio gives an assessment of relative URL In the case of a retrospective cohort study, the investigator collects data from past records and does not follow up with patients over a long period of time (as is the case in a prospective cohort study ) . However, the outcome) .
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Original:  These groups are then assessed retrospectively in order to establish the most likely temporal sequence of events leading up to the current disease state in both the exposed and unexposed groups.
Revised:  These groups are then assessed retrospectively to establish the most likely temporal sequence of events leading up to the current disease state in both the exposed and unexposed groups.
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Original:  These groups are then assessed retrospectively in order to establish the most likely temporal sequence of events leading up to the current disease state in both the exposed and unexposed groups.
Revised:  These groups are then assessed retrospectively in order to establish the most likely temporal sequence of events leading to the current disease state in both the exposed and unexposed groups.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Caution needs to be exercised, in particular , with retrospective cohort studies because errors due to confounding and bias are more common in retrospective studies than in prospective studies.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Retrospective cohort studies require particular caution because errors due to confounding and bias are more common in retrospective studies than in prospective studies.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Caution needs to be exercised, in particular , with retrospective cohort studies because errors due to confounding and bias are more common in retrospective studies than in prospective studies.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Caution needs to be exercised, in particular , with retrospective cohort studies because errors due to confounding and bias are more common than in prospective studies.
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Original:  Advantages Retrospective cohort studies have the following distinct advantages when compared with prospective cohort studies: they are conducted on a smaller scale , they typically require less time to complete , they are better for analysing multiple outcomes, and, in a medical context, they can potentially address rare diseases, which would necessitate extremely large cohorts in prospective studies.
Revised:  Advantages Retrospective cohort studies exhibit the benefits of cohort studies and have distinct advantages relative to prospective ones: They are conducted on a smaller scale , they typically require less time to complete , they are better for analysing multiple outcomes, and, in a medical context, they can potentially address rare diseases, which would necessitate extremely large cohorts in prospective studies.
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Original:  Advantages Retrospective cohort studies have the following distinct advantages when compared with prospective cohort studies: they are conducted on a smaller scale , they typically require less time to complete , they are better for analysing multiple outcomes, and, in a medical context, they can potentially address rare diseases, which would necessitate extremely large cohorts in prospective studies.
Revised:  Advantages Retrospective cohort studies have the following distinct advantages when compared with prospective cohort studies: they are conducted on a smaller scale . They typically require less time to complete , they are better for analysing multiple outcomes, and, in a medical context, they can potentially address rare diseases, which would necessitate extremely large cohorts in prospective studies.
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Original:  In such a study, diseased people have already been identified so retrospective studies are especially helpful in addressing diseases of low  URL The fact that retrospective studies are generally less expensive than prospective studies may be another key benefit.
Revised:  Retrospective studies are especially helpful in addressing diseases of low URL The fact that retrospective studies are generally less expensive than prospective studies may be another key benefit.
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Original:  In such a study, diseased people have already been identified so retrospective studies are especially helpful in addressing diseases of low  URL The fact that retrospective studies are generally less expensive than prospective studies may be another key benefit.
Revised:  In such a study, diseased people have already been identified so retrospective studies are especially helpful in addressing diseases of low incidence, since affected people have already been identified so URL The fact that retrospective studies are generally less expensive than prospective studies may be another key benefit.
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Original:  These studies tend to be less expensive in part because outcome and exposure have already occurred, and the resources are directed at mainly collection of data.
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Original:  Disadvantages Retrospective studies have disadvantages vis-a-vis prospective studies . Among the disadvantages are that some key statistics cannot be measured,
Revised:  Disadvantages Retrospective studies have disadvantages vis-a-vis prospective studies : Some key statistics cannot be measured,
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Original:  major biases with retrospective cohort studies can impact the recall of former exposure to risk variables . Among the biaseswhich can negatively impact the veracity of this type of study are selection bias and misclassification or information bias as a result of the retrospective URL With retrospective studies,
Revised:  major biases with retrospective cohort studies can impact the recall of former exposure to risk variables , recall may be inaccurate and subject to biases. It can be very difficult to make accurate comparisons between the exposed and the non-exposed. The retrospective aspect may introduce selection bias and misclassification or information bias as a result of the retrospective URL With retrospective studies,
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Original:  major biases with retrospective cohort studies can impact the recall of former exposure to risk variables . Among the biaseswhich can negatively impact the veracity of this type of study are selection bias and misclassification or information bias as a result of the retrospective URL With retrospective studies,
Revised:  major biases with retrospective cohort studies can impact the recall of former exposure to risk variables . Among the biaseswhich can negatively impact the veracity of this type of study are selection bias and mis-classification or information URL With retrospective studies,
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Original:  Differences with case-control studies While retrospective cohort studies try to compare the risk of developing a disease to some already known exposure factors, a case-control study will try to determine the possible exposure factors after a known disease incidence.
Revised:  Comparison with case-control studies While retrospective cohort studies try to compare the risk of developing a disease to some already known exposure factors, a case-control study will try to determine the possible exposure factors after a known disease incidence.
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Original:  Category:Medical research Category:Cohort study methods Category:Clinical research Category:Nursing resear
Revised:  Category:Cohort study methods Category:Clinical research Category:Nursing resear
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Original:   They are better for analyzing multiple outcomes.
Revised:  dead link They are better for analyzing multiple outcomes.
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Original:  A cohort of individuals that share a common exposure factor is compared to another group of equivalent individuals not exposed to that factor, to determine the factor's influence on the incidence of a condition such as disease or death.
Revised:  A cohort of individuals that share a common exposure factor is compared with another group of equivalent individuals not exposed to that factor, to determine the factor's influence on the incidence of a condition such as disease or death.
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Original:  They are generally less expensive, because resources are mainly devoted to collecting data. dead link They are better for analyzing multiple outcomes.
Revised:  They are generally less expensive, because resources are mainly devoted to collecting data. They are better for analyzing multiple outcomes.
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Original: Career When the revolution of 1848 broke out he took an active part as one of the leaders of the republican party in his native city, both as  popular orator and as editor of the Mainzer Zeitung  .
Revised: Career When the revolution of 1848 broke out he took an active part as one of the leaders of the republican party in his native city, both as a popular orator and as editor of the Mainzer Zeitung .
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Original:  In 1849 he took part in the republican rising in the Palatinate and Baden;
Revised:  In 1849 he took part in the republican uprising in the Palatinate and Baden;
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Original:  on the restoration of order he was condemned to death, but he had escaped with other leading revolutionaries like Germain Metternich, Louis Blenker, and Franz Zitz  to Switzerland.
Revised:  on the restoration of order he was condemned to death, but by then with other leading revolutionaries like Germain Metternich, Louis Blenker, and Franz Zitz to Switzerland.
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Original:  on the restoration of order he was condemned to death, but he had escaped with other leading revolutionaries like Germain Metternich, Louis Blenker, and Franz Zitz  to Switzerland.
Revised:  on the restoration of order he was condemned to death, but he had escaped with other leading revolutionaries like Germain Metternich, Louis Blenker, and Franz Zitz he had escaped to Switzerland.
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Original: With private banker Adelbert Delbruck, on January 22 , 1870, he founded Deutsche Bank in Berlin as a specialist bank for foreign trade.
Revised: With private banker Adelbert Delbruck, on 22 , 1870, he founded Deutsche Bank in Berlin as a specialist bank for foreign trade.
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