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Original:  Sarath also had the honour of working as visual Director in India ’ s first prestigious multi-media project - Geet Govinda, a collaboration involving The Indira Gandhi National Centre for Arts, New Delhi and the multimedia design expertise of XEROX Palo Alto Research centre, USA. Dr Kapila Vatsyayan wrote the script for this multimedia venture in 1997.
Revised:  Sarath also had the honour of working as visual Director in India ' s first prestigious multi-media project - Geet Govinda, a collaboration involving The Indira Gandhi National Centre for Arts, New Delhi and the multimedia design expertise of XEROX Palo Alto Research centre, USA. Dr Kapila Vatsyayan wrote the script for this multimedia venture in 1997.
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Original: The Kotoko kingdom was a West African monarchy in what is today northern Cameroon and Nigeria, and southwestern Chad.
Revised: The Kotoko kingdom was a African monarchy in what is today northern Cameroon and Nigeria, and southwestern Chad.
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Original: The Kotoko kingdom was a African monarchy in what is today northern Cameroon and Nigeria, and southwestern Chad.
Revised: The Kotoko kingdom was an African monarchy in what is today northern Cameroon and Nigeria, and southwestern Chad.
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Original:  Holding the post till 2002, he was instrumental neutralizing LTTE activity in the UN . Currently he is a consultant and counsel for the law firm D. L.%DIFDELCMD < & %%% F. De Saram
Revised:  Holding the post till 2002, he was instrumental neutralizing LTTE activity in the UN Currently he is a consultant and counsel for the law firm D. L.%DIFDELCMD < & %%% F. De Saram
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Original:  Holding the post till 2002, he was instrumental neutralizing LTTE activity in the UN . Currently he is a consultant and counsel for the law firm D. L.%DIFDELCMD < & %%% F. De Saram
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Original: John De Saram (born 27 June 1929) is a Sri Lankan diplomat and lawyer , who served as Permanent Representative of Sri Lanka to the United Nations in New York.
Revised: John De Saram (born 27 June 1929) is a Sri Lankan lawyer and diplomat , who served as Permanent Representative of Sri Lanka to the United Nations in New York.
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Original:   A legend in the making Career  After a brief period of private practice , he joined the United Nations Office of Legal Affairs . Rising to become the Director of the Office of the Legal Counsel of the  Office of Legal Affairs , he became  a member of the United Nations International Law Commission.
Revised:  A legend in the making Career After a brief period of private practice , he joined the United Nations Office of Legal Affairs . Rising to become the Director of the Office of the Legal Counsel of the Office of Legal Affairs , he became He was also a member of the United Nations International Law Commission.
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Original:  In   1998 he took up appointment as Permanent Representative of Sri Lanka to the United Nations in New York.
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Original:  Holding the post till 2002, he was instrumental neutralizing LTTE activity in the UN  
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Original: Visiting Faculty in International Law and Settlement of DisputesProgramme (2002-2003) He represented Ceylon as a sprinter at the 1948 Summer Olympics and 1950 British Empire Games.
Revised: Visiting Faculty in International Law and Settlement of DisputesProgramme (2002-2003) 
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Original:  Competition record  Representing 1948OlympicsLondon, England6th, Qtr 2200
Revised:  Competition record Competition record= Representing 1948OlympicsLondon, England6th, Qtr 2200
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Original:  Borno in 1810%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Post-Sayfawa Era File:Group of Kanem-Bu warriors.jpg|Kanembu warriors and their mounted chief in an illustration from Heinrich Barth's Travels and Discoveries, Vol. III, 1857.
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Original:  Borno in 1810%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Post-Sayfawa Era File:Group of Kanem-Bu warriors.jpg|Kanembu warriors and their mounted chief in an illustration from Heinrich Barth's Travels and Discoveries, Vol. III, 1857.
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Original:  See also Kanem Empire Kanem-Bornu Empire Sayfawa dynasty Chronology of the Sayfawa (Kanem-Bornu) Dīwān (Girgam) Ibn Furtu History of Nigeria List of Sunni Muslim dynasties%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Bibliography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Brenner, Louis: The Shehus of Kukawa, Oxford 1973.
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Original:  See also Kanem Empire Kanem-Bornu Empire Sayfawa dynasty Chronology of the Sayfawa (Kanem-Bornu) Dīwān (Girgam) Ibn Furtu History of Nigeria List of Sunni Muslim dynasties%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Bibliography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Brenner, Louis: The Shehus of Kukawa, Oxford 1973.
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Original:  See also Kanem Empire Kanem-Bornu Empire Sayfawa dynasty Chronology of the Sayfawa (Kanem-Bornu) Dīwān (Girgam) Ibn Furtu History of Nigeria List of Sunni Muslim dynasties%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Bibliography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Brenner, Louis: The Shehus of Kukawa, Oxford 1973.
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Original:  External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Story of Africa: Kanem-Borno — BBC World Service Category:1893 disestablishments Category:States and territories established in 1387 Category:States of medieval Africa Category:States of precolonial Africa Category:Former empires of Africa Category:History of Cameroon Category:History of Northern Nigeria Category:History of Chad Category:Muslim empires Category:Kanem Empire
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Story of Africa: Kanem-Borno — BBC World Service Category:1893 disestablishments Category:States and territories established in 1387 Category:States of medieval Africa Category:States of precolonial Africa Category:Former empires of Africa Category:History of Cameroon Category:History of Northern Nigeria Category:History of Chad Category:Muslim empires Category:Kanem Empire
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Original: Lange, Chronicle, 38. His active diplomacy featured relations with Tripoli, Egypt, and the Ottoman Empire, which sent a 200-member ambassadorial party across the desert to Aluma 's court at Ngazargamu.
Revised: Lange, Chronicle, 38. His active diplomacy featured relations with Tripoli, Egypt, and the Ottoman Empire, which sent a 200-member ambassadorial party across the desert to Alooma 's court at Ngazargamu.
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Original:  The empire was still ruled by the mai who was advised by his councilors (kokenawa) in the state council or "nokena".
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Original:  External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Story of Africa: Kanem-Borno — BBC World Service
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