wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Distressed swimmer or drowning non-swimmer (DNS) is a term used by the Life Saving Society of Canada to describe a particular  victim type.
Revised: Distressed swimmer or distressed non-swimmer (DNS) is a term used by the Life Saving Society of Canada to describe a particular victim type.
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Original: Distressed swimmer or drowning non-swimmer (DNS) is a term used by the Life Saving Society of Canada to describe a particular  victim type.
Revised: Distressed swimmer or drowning non-swimmer (DNS) is a term used by the Life Saving Society of Canada to describe a particular swimming victim type.
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Original:  Lifesaving Society, 2004 Usage The acronym "DNS" is a commonly used term within the Canadian Lifesaving Society to expedite the process of describing a victim.
Revised:  Lifesaving Society, 2004 The acronym "DNS" is a commonly used term within the Canadian Lifesaving Society to expedite the process of describing a victim.
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Original:  This is particularly useful in emergency situations where time is of the essence, and where the phrase " drowning non-swimmer" would be difficult to say.
Revised:  This is particularly useful in emergency situations where time is of the essence, and where the phrase " distressed non-swimmer" would be difficult to say.
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Original:   Notes and references
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Original:  Category:Publishing _ter
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Original: There are antecedents to the Ghost Publishing including the American minicomic movement of the 1970’s and 1980’s , the Soviet underground publishing phenomena Samizdat, and the hand to hand distribution of many Beat manuscripts of the 1940’s and 1950’s many of which were circulated in typescript for more than ten years before eventually being published.
Revised: There are antecedents to the Ghost Publishing including the American minicomic movement of the 1970s and 1980s , the Soviet underground publishing phenomena Samizdat, and the hand to hand distribution of many Beat manuscripts of the 1940’s and 1950’s many of which were circulated in typescript for more than ten years before eventually being published.
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Original: There are antecedents to the Ghost Publishing including the American minicomic movement of the 1970’s and 1980’s , the Soviet underground publishing phenomena Samizdat, and the hand to hand distribution of many Beat manuscripts of the 1940’s and 1950’s many of which were circulated in typescript for more than ten years before eventually being published.
Revised: There are antecedents to the Ghost Publishing including the American minicomic movement of the 1970’s and 1980’s , the Soviet underground publishing phenomena Samizdat, and the hand to hand distribution of many Beat manuscripts of the 1940s and 1950s many of which were circulated in typescript for more than ten years before eventually being published.
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Original:  There is nothing in the published interview to suggest that the interviewer sought or Lovelock offered any evidence to support that serious allegation .
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Original:  There’s bound to have been some corruption there – I’m sure that various green movements were paid some sums on the side to help with propaganda". .
Revised:  There’s bound to have been some corruption there – I’m sure that various green movements were paid some sums on the side to help with propaganda". 
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Original:  in URL Location Date School Degree Status England 1982 University of East Anglia Doctor of Science (D.Sc) England 1988 University of Exeter Doctor of Science URL England 1988 Plymouth Polytechnic Doctor of Science (D.Sc) Sweden 1991 Stockholm University Doctor of Science (D.Sc) Scotland 1993 University of Edinburgh Doctor of Science (D.Sc) England 18 May 1996 University of Kent Doctor of Science URL Colorado 1997 University of Colorado Boulder Doctor of Humane Letters URL
Revised:  in URL Location Date School Degree Status England 1982 University of East Anglia Doctor of Science (D.Sc) England 1988 University of Exeter Doctor of Science (D.Sc) England 1988 Plymouth Polytechnic Doctor of Science (D.Sc) Sweden 1991 Stockholm University Doctor of Science (D.Sc) Scotland 1993 University of Edinburgh Doctor of Science (D.Sc) England 18 May 1996 University of Kent Doctor of Science URL Colorado 1997 University of Colorado Boulder Doctor of Humane Letters URL
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Original:  The family moved to London, where Lovelock's dislike of authority made him, by his own account, an unhappy pupil at Strand School.
Revised:  The family moved to London, where his dislike of authority made him, by his own account, an unhappy pupil at Strand School.
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Original: Xiangen Hu is a professor in cognitive psychology at the University of Memphis and is a faculty member of the Institute of Intelligent Systems .
Revised: Xiangen Hu is a professor in cognitive psychology at the University of Memphis and is a senior researcher at its Institute for Intelligent Systems (IIS) .
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Original: Early life Born in Virajpet in Coorg in 1924, Muthamma lost her father, who was a forest officer,  when she was nine  .
Revised: Early life Born in Virajpet in Coorg . Her father, who was a forest officer, when she was nine .
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Original:  Her mother made it a priority to educate their four childrenwell.
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Original: Joseph’s Girls School in Madikeri, and graduated from the Women ’ s Christian College in Chennai (then Madras ) with a triple gold medal.
Revised: Joseph’s Girls School in Madikeri, and graduated from the Women ' s Christian College in Chennai (then Madras ) with a triple gold medal.
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Original: Joseph’s Girls School in Madikeri, and graduated from the Women ’ s Christian College in Chennai (then Madras ) with a triple gold medal.
Revised: Joseph’s Girls School in Madikeri, and graduated from the Women ’ s Christian College , Chennai (Madras at that point ) with a triple gold medal.
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Original:  C.B. Muthamma was  the first woman entrant to the Indian civil services through the UPSC examination , clearing the examination in 1948, and also the first IFS woman officer, joining the service in 1949.
Revised:  C.B. Muthamma was the first woman to join the Indian Civil Services by clearing the Indian civil services through the UPSC examination , clearing the examination in 1948, and also the first IFS woman officer, joining the service in 1949.
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Original:  C.B. Muthamma was  the first woman entrant to the Indian civil services through the UPSC examination , clearing the examination in 1948, and also the first IFS woman officer, joining the service in 1949.
Revised:  C.B. Muthamma was the first woman entrant to the UPSC examination , clearing the examination in 1948, and also the first IFS woman officer, joining the service in 1949.
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Original:  When she entered the service, she was made to sign an undertaking that she would resign if she got married.
Revised:  When she entered the service, Muthamma was made to sign an undertaking that she would resign if she got married.
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Original:  When she entered the service, she was made to sign an undertaking that she would resign if she got married.
Revised:  When she entered the service, she was made to sign an undertaking that she would resign from her job once she got married.
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Original:  She finished at the top of the list of candidates who has applied for the Indian Foreign Service that year and went on to join the the service in 1949.
Revised:  She finished at the top of the list of candidates who has applied for the Indian Foreign Service that year and went on to join the service in 1949.
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Original:  She was posted as India’s Ambassador to Hungary in 1970.
Revised:  She was appointed India’s Ambassador to Hungary in 1970.
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Original:  Other notable works After retirement she was nominated as the Indian member of the Independent Commission on Disarmament and Security Issues set up by the then Swedish Prime Minister, Olof Palme.
Revised:  Other notable works After retirement , she became the Indian member of the Independent Commission on Disarmament and Security Issues set up by the then Swedish Prime Minister, Olof Palme.
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Original:  The week she died she signed a cheque for a library  Gonikoppal High School and for a business management college building in Virajpet in her native place.
Revised:  The week she died she signed a cheque for a library in Gonikoppal High School and for a business management college building in Virajpet in her native place.
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Original:  # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 22 March 1964 Alexandria Stadium, Alexandria 2–2 1–1  Friendly 2. 4 November 1964 Stade d'El Anasser , Algiers 2–  2 2 –
Revised:  # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 22 March 1964 Alexandria Stadium, Alexandria 1–1 Friendly 2. 4 November 1964 Stade d'El Anasser , Algiers 2– 2 2 –
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Original:  # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 22 March 1964 Alexandria Stadium, Alexandria 2–2 1–1  Friendly 2. 4 November 1964 Stade d'El Anasser , Algiers 2–  2 2 –
Revised:  # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 22 March 1964 Alexandria Stadium, Alexandria 2–2 1–1 Friendly 2. 4 November 1964 Stade El Annasser , Algiers 2– 2 2 –
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Original:  # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 22 March 1964 Alexandria Stadium, Alexandria 2–2 1–1  Friendly 2. 4 November 1964 Stade d'El Anasser , Algiers 2–  2 2 –
Revised:  # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 22 March 1964 Alexandria Stadium, Alexandria 2–2 1–1 Friendly 2. 4 November 1964 Stade d'El Anasser , Algiers 2– 1 2 2 –
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Original:  # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 22 March 1964 Alexandria Stadium, Alexandria 2–2 1–1  Friendly 2. 4 November 1964 Stade d'El Anasser , Algiers 2–  2 2 –
Revised:  # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 22 March 1964 Alexandria Stadium, Alexandria 2–2 1–1 Friendly 2. 4 November 1964 Stade d'El Anasser , Algiers 2– 2 –
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Original:  1 Friendly 3. 19 July 1965 Stade Alphonse Massemba-Débat,
Revised:  2 Friendly 3. 19 July 1965 Stade Alphonse Massemba-Débat,
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Original:  Ouagadougou 1-2 1–2  1968 African Cup of Nations qualification 6. 12 September 1967 Stade Chedli Zouiten,
Revised:  Ouagadougou 1–2 1968 African Cup of Nations qualification 6. 12 September 1967 Stade Chedli Zouiten,
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Original:  Ouagadougou 1-2 1–2  1968 African Cup of Nations qualification 6. 12 September 1967 Stade Chedli Zouiten,
Revised:  Ouagadougou 1-2 1–2 1–2 1968 African Cup of Nations qualification 6. 12 September 1967 Stade Chedli Zouiten,
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2– 2 2 – 1 Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2– 2 2 – 1 Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2– 2 2 – 1 Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2– 2 2 – 1 Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2– 2 2 – 1 Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2– 2 2 – 1 Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 2–2 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2– 2 2 – 1 Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 1–0 2– 2 2 – 1 Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2– 2 – 1 Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0  1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca  2–  2 2 –  1   Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0  Friendly
Revised:  Tunis 1-3 0–2 Friendly 7. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 1–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 8. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 2–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 9. 14 January 1968 Hailé Sélassié Stadium, Addis Ababa 4-0 3–0 1968 African Cup of Nations 10. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2–2 1–0 Friendly 11. 26 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 2– 2 2 – 1 –0 3–1 Friendly Friendly 12. 30 June 1968 Stade Mohamed V, Casablanca 3– 2 1–0 Friendly
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Original: Biography Although he started his career with OM Ruisseau, Lalmas played most of his career for CR Belouizdad and it is with CRB.
Revised: Biography Although he started his career with OM Ruisseau, Lalmas played most of his career for CR Belouizdad and it was with CRB.
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Original: 2018 deaths Category:Algerian footballers Category:Algeria international footballers Category:Kabyle people Category:Footballers from Algiers Category:CR Belouizdad players Category:OMR El Annasser players Category:Competitors at the 1967 Mediterranean Games Category:1968 African Cup of Nations players Category:Association football midfielders Category:Mediterranean Games competitors for Algeria Category:Footballers at the 1965 All-Africa Games Category:African Games competitors for Alger
Revised: 2018 deaths Category:Algerian footballers Category:Algeria international footballers Category:Kabyle people Category:Footballers from Algiers Category:CR Belouizdad players Category:OMR El Annasser players Category:Competitors at the 1967 Mediterranean Games Category:1968 African Cup of Nations players Category:Association football midfielders Category:Mediterranean Games competitors for Algeria Category:Footballers at the 1965 All-Africa Games Category:African Games competitors for Algeria Category:21st-century Algerian peop
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Original:  He scored 131 goals in Algerian championship (record).
Revised:  Lalmas scored a record 131 goals in Algerian championship (record).
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Original:  Biography Although he started his career with OM Ruisseau, Lalmas played most of his career for CR Belouizdad and it was with CRB.
Revised:  Club career Although he started his career with OM Ruisseau, Lalmas played most of his career for CR Belouizdad and it was with CRB.
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Original:  International statistics International goals Scores and results list Algeria's goal tally first.
Revised:  International statistics International Scores and results list Algeria's goal tally first.
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Original:  2–5 Friendly 14. 25 December 1969 Stade El Annasser, Algiers 1–0 3–1 Friendly International goals (vs clubs) # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 24 December 1966 19 June Stadium, Oran AS Angoulême 3–0 4–1 Friendly 2. 28 January 1967 Stade El Annasser, Algiers FC La Chaux-de-Fonds 1–0 3–0 Friendly 3. 30 August 1967 Municipal Stadium, Annaba Olympique Avignonnais 1–0 4–3 Friendly 4. –
Revised:  2–5 Friendly 14. 25 December 1969 Stade El Annasser, Algiers 1–0 3–1 International goals (vs clubs) # Date Venue Opponent Score Result Competition 1. 24 December 1966 19 June Stadium, Oran AS Angoulême 3–0 4–1 Friendly 2. 28 January 1967 Stade El Annasser, Algiers FC La Chaux-de-Fonds 1–0 3–0 Friendly 3. 30 August 1967 Municipal Stadium, Annaba Olympique Avignonnais 1–0 4–3 Friendly 4. –
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