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Original:  “ I can say to you without false modesty: mission accomplished ” he told crowds of around 50,000 on Friday, “We’ ve reunited and pacified the country.
Revised:  “ I can say to you without false modesty: mission accomplished ” he told crowds of around 50,000 on Friday, "We' ve reunited and pacified the country.
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Original:  ” International observers, such as the Carter Centre, expressed concern that the incumbent President ’ s domination of the media would undermine the campaign.
Revised:  " International observers, such as the Carter Centre, expressed concern that the incumbent President ’ s domination of the media would undermine the campaign.
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Original:  ” International observers, such as the Carter Centre, expressed concern that the incumbent President ’ s domination of the media would undermine the campaign.
Revised:  ” International observers, such as the Carter Centre, expressed concern that the incumbent President ' s domination of the media would undermine the campaign.
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Original:  This Thursday, 6 people were killed in election related incidents in the capital, Kinshasa, and yesterday, Kabila ’ s presidential guards killed an opposition candidate ’ s bodyguard in a gunfight.
Revised:  This Thursday, 6 people were killed in election related incidents in the capital, Kinshasa, and yesterday, Kabila ' s presidential guards killed an opposition candidate ’ s bodyguard in a gunfight.
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Original:  This Thursday, 6 people were killed in election related incidents in the capital, Kinshasa, and yesterday, Kabila ’ s presidential guards killed an opposition candidate ’ s bodyguard in a gunfight.
Revised:  This Thursday, 6 people were killed in election related incidents in the capital, Kinshasa, and yesterday, Kabila ’ s presidential guards killed an opposition candidate ' s bodyguard in a gunfight.
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Original:  The U.N. has deployed it ’ s largest ever peacekeeping force – 17,000 – to monitor the elections, costing over $460 million.
Revised:  The U.N. has deployed it ' s largest ever peacekeeping force – 17,000 – to monitor the elections, costing over $460 million.
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Original:  Despite troubles, the deputy U.N. representative in the country, Ross Mountain, said the Democratic Republic is ready for tomorrow ’ s polls.
Revised:  Despite troubles, the deputy U.N. representative in the country, Ross Mountain, said the Democratic Republic is ready for tomorrow ' s polls.
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Original:  Daniel Carter 1 conversion, 1 penalty, 1 dropped goa
Revised:  Daniel Carter 1 conversion, 1 penalty, 1 dropped goal
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Original: The New Zealand All Blacks have defeated the Australian Wallabies for the second time this year and have retained the Bledisloe Cup, winning 14-9 . All Black winger, Joe Rokocoko scored the matches only try , in the first half, beating several defenders on his way to the line.
Revised: The New Zealand All Blacks have defeated the Australian Wallabies for the second time this year and have retained the Bledisloe Cup, winning 14-9 . All Black winger, Joe Rokocoko scored the only try of the match in the first half, beating several defenders on his way to the line.
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Original:  Earlier in the week Australian coach, John Connolly, stated that the new All Blacks haka Kapa O Pango should be banned, causing much controversy, sighting that the throat slitting gesture at the end is a bad example.
Revised:  Earlier in the week Australian coach, John Connolly, stated that the new All Blacks haka Kapa O Pango should be banned, causing much controversy, citing that the throat slitting gesture at the end is a bad example.
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Original:  All Black winger, Joe Rokocoko scored  the only try of the match in the first half , beating several defenders on his way to the line.
Revised:  All Black winger, Joe Rokocoko scored the only try of the match , beating several defenders on his way to the line.
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Original:    Earlier in the week Australian coach, John Connolly, stated that the new All Blacks haka Kapa O Pango should be banned, causing much controversy, citing that the throat slitting gesture at the end is a bad example . Stirling Mortlock kicked 3 goals.
Revised:  Earlier in the week Australian coach, John Connolly, stated that the new All Blacks haka Kapa O Pango should be banned, causing much controversy, citing that the throat slitting gesture at the end is a bad example Stirling Mortlock kicked 3 goals.
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Original:  The All Blacks struck back quickly though, withwinger , Joe Rokocoko scoring the only try of the match, beating several defenders on his way to the line.
Revised:  The All Blacks struck back quickly though, with winger , Joe Rokocoko scoring the only try of the match, beating several defenders on his way to the line.
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Original:  The win extends New Zealand lead on Tri Nations table, now seven points adrift of Australia, with the All Blacks on 13 and the Wallabies on 6. South Africa are on zero.
Revised:  The win extends New Zealand lead on Tri Nations table, now seven points ahead of Australia, with the All Blacks on 13 and the Wallabies on 6. South Africa are on zero.
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Original: Prior to the protest, Mr Howard told his party conference that two things must happen before peace cn be realised in the middle east.
Revised: Prior to the protest, Mr Howard told his party conference that two things must happen before peace can be realised in the middle east.
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Original:  One protestor managed to break  the Australian flag attached to the front of Mr Howard's vehicle off .
Revised:  One protestor managed to break off the Australian flag attached to the front of Mr Howard's vehicle off .
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Original:  One protestor managed to break  the Australian flag attached to the front of Mr Howard's vehicle off .
Revised:  One protestor managed to break the Australian flag attached to the front of Mr Howard's vehicle .
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Original:  The lakes are believe to have been formed by rainfall of liquid methane or ethane.
Revised:  The lakes are believed to have been formed by rainfall of liquid methane or ethane.
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Original:  He got several shots in his shest .
Revised:  The area would be used by sister Dorothy Stang in a new project .
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Original: According to the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo the body of a dead man was found on  Tuesday February 15, 2005 by morning in Anapu, Pará, Brazil.
Revised: According to the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo the body of a dead man was found on the morning of Tuesday February 15, 2005 by morning in Anapu, Pará, Brazil.
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Original: According to the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo the body of a dead man was found on  Tuesday February 15, 2005 by morning in Anapu, Pará, Brazil.
Revised: According to the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo the body of a dead man was found on Tuesday February 15, 2005 in Anapu, Pará, Brazil.
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Original:  He was identified as the agriculturist Cláudio Branco nickenamed as Mato Grosso.
Revised:  He was identified as the agriculturist Cláudio Branco who was also known by the nickname Mato Grosso.
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Original: According to the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo the body of a dead man was found on the morning of Tuesday  February 15, 2005 in Anapu, Pará, Brazil.
Revised: According to the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo the body of a dead man was found on the morning of Tuesday , February 15, 2005 in Anapu, Pará, Brazil.
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Original: According to the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo the body of a dead man was found on the morning of Tuesday  February 15, 2005 in Anapu, Pará, Brazil.
Revised: According to the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo the body of a dead man was found on the morning of Tuesday February 15, in Anapu, Pará, Brazil.
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Original:  He was found in Anapu at Gleba Manduacari which belongs to the government agency Incra.
Revised:  He was found in Anapu at Gleba Manduacari , on government property controled by the agency Incra.
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Original:  The area would be used by  sister Dorothy Stang in a new project.
Revised:  The area was to be used by sister Dorothy Stang in a new project.
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Original:  The area would be used by  sister Dorothy Stang in a new project.
Revised:  The area would be used by slain sister Dorothy Stang in a new project.
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Original:  The body was moved to Altamira so the medical legal expert can examine it .
Revised:  The body was moved to Altamira for an autopsy .
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Original: After a raid killed at least 54 civilians  Israel agreed on Monday to suspend its aerial activities in south Lebanon for 48 hours.
Revised: After a raid killed at least 54 civilians , Israel agreed on Monday to suspend its aerial activities in south Lebanon for 48 hours.
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Original:  The announcement came after extended meetings s between Condoleezza Rice, the US secretary of state, and Ehud Olmert, the Israeli prime minister.
Revised:  The announcement came after extended meetings between Condoleezza Rice, the US secretary of state, and Ehud Olmert, the Israeli prime minister.
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Original:  The  ceasefire began after midnight on Sunday but despite to Israel's air campaign, fighting on the ground continues as Israeli forces aim to create a 'security zone' inside Lebanon along the Israeli border  .
Revised:  The ceasefire began after midnight on Sunday but fighting on the ground continues as Israeli forces aim to create a 'security zone' inside Lebanon along the Israeli border .
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Original: Potent symbol Qana became a potent symbol of Lebanese civilian deaths by Israeli military bombings after an earlier incident in April 1996, when Israeli shelling killed more than 100 civilians sheltering at the base of U.N. peacekeepers in the village during Israel's "Grapes of Wrath" campaign.
Revised:  Qana became a potent symbol of Lebanese civilian deaths by Israeli military bombings after an earlier incident in April 1996, when Israeli shelling killed more than 100 civilians sheltering at the base of U.N. peacekeepers in the village during Israel's "Grapes of Wrath" campaign.
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Original: Potent symbol Qana became a potent symbol of Lebanese civilian deaths by Israeli military bombings after an earlier incident in April 1996, when Israeli shelling killed more than 100 civilians sheltering at the base of U.N. peacekeepers in the village during Israel's "Grapes of Wrath" campaign.
Revised: Potent symbol 
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Original: After one of its raids  killed at least 56 civilians , Israel agreed on Monday to suspend its aerial activities in south Lebanon for 48 hours.
Revised: After one of its raids killed at least 56 civilians . Israel agreed on Monday to suspend its aerial activities in south Lebanon for 48 hours.
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Original: 8 hours after one of its raids on Quana, a building collapse killed at least 56 civilians .
Revised: Eight hours after an airstrike on a building in Qana in which 56 civilians .
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Original: Eight hours after an airstrike on a building in Qana in which 56 civilians were reported killed , Israel agreed on Monday to suspend its aerial activities in south Lebanon for 48 hours.
Revised: Eight hours after an airstrike on a building in Qana in which 56 civilians , Israel agreed on Monday to suspend its aerial activities in south Lebanon for 48 hours.
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Original:  And all coins except the 10-cent are now made from plated steel and nickel, it also means they are lighter.
Revised:  And all coins except the 10-cent are now made from plated steel and nickel, making them lighter.
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Original:  However, people can still use their old silver change between now and 1 November 2006, where the old coins will become illegal tender.
Revised:  However, people can still use their old silver change between now and 1 November 2006, when the old coins will become illegal tender.
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Original:  However, people can still use their old silver change between now and 1 November 2006, where the old coins will become illegal tender.
Revised:  However, people can still use their old silver change between now and 1 November 2006, where the old coins will cease being legal tender.
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Original:  The ANZ Bank are also asking for people to donate their old 5-cent coins to Plunket in their '5s for under fives' appeal.
Revised:  The ANZ Bank are asking for people to donate their old 5-cent coins to Plunket in their '5s for under fives' appeal.
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Original:  And all coins except the 10-cent are now made from plated steel and nickel, making them lighter  .
Revised:  And all coins except the 10-cent are now made from plated steel and nickel, making them lighter and cheaper to produce .
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Original:  The new coins replace the 10-cent coin, 20-cent coin and the 50-cent coin and the 5-cent coin is being removed from circulation for good.
Revised:  The new coins replace the 10, 20 and 50 cent coins, while the 5-cent coin is being removed from circulation for good.
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Original:  And all coins except the 10-cent are now made from plated steel and nickel, making them lighter and cheaper to produce.
Revised:  All coins except the 10-cent are now made from plated steel and nickel, making them lighter and cheaper to produce.
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Original: Today New Zealand's new silver coins have been released.
Revised: Today New Zealand's new coins have been released.
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Original:  The Reserve Bank reports that they have issued 1,037 million silver coins since the introduction of decimal currency.
Revised:  The Reserve Bank reports that they have issued 1,037 million coins since the introduction of decimal currency.
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Original:  However, people can still use their old silver change between now and 1 November 2006, when the old coins will cease being legal tender.
Revised:  However, people can still use their old change between now and 1 November 2006, when the old coins will cease being legal tender.
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Original: Israeli jets have carried out strikes near the village of Taibe in South Lebanon, despite agreeing to halt such action for 48 hours.
Revised: Israeli jets have carried out strikes in southern Lebanon, despite agreeing to halt such action for 48 hours.
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Original: Israeli jets have carried out strikes near the village of Taibe in South Lebanon, despite agreeing to halt such action for 48 hours.
Revised: Israeli jets have carried out strikes near the village of Taibe in South Lebanon, despite agreeing to halt air attacks for 48 hours.
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Original:  An army spokesman has confirmed the action saying the it was intended to support ground troops in the area and was not targeting anything specific.
Revised:  An army spokesman has confirmed the action saying that the plane was intended to support ground troops in the area and was not targeting anything specific.
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Original:  He also emphasised that marriage is a relationship between a man and a woman so they can create and bring children up:
Revised:  He emphasised that marriage is a relationship between a man and a woman so they can create and bring children up:
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Original:  He also emphasised that marriage is a relationship between a man and a woman so they can create and bring children up:
Revised:  He also emphasised that marriage is a relationship between a man and a woman designed for creating and bringing children up:
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Original:  She said they had been “stripped” of their marriage by a judge who believes the “traditional notion” of marriage is between a man and a woman , in order to create children.
Revised:  She said they had been “stripped” of their marriage by a judge who believes the “traditional notion” of marriage as being between a man and a woman , in order to create children.
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Original:  She said they had been “stripped” of their marriage by a judge who believes the “traditional notion” of marriage is between a man and a woman , in order to create children.
Revised:  She said they had been “stripped” of their marriage by a judge who believes the “traditional notion” of marriage is between a man and a woman so they can create children.
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Original: The judge also said same-sex laws in England are “ in no way inferior ” as they are recognised as civil partnerships which give gay and lesbian couples the same rights as married couples on many issues.
Revised: The judge also said same-sex laws in England are in no way inferior ” as they are recognised as civil partnerships which give gay and lesbian couples the same rights as married couples on many issues.
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Original: The judge also said same-sex laws in England are “ in no way inferior ” as they are recognised as civil partnerships which give gay and lesbian couples the same rights as married couples on many issues.
Revised: The judge also said same-sex laws in England are “ in no way inferior as they are recognised as civil partnerships which give gay and lesbian couples the same rights as married couples on many issues.
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Original:  However, the two women say civil partnerships are not good enough for gay couples After the hearing, Ms Wilkinson said she and Ms Kitzinger were “deeply disappointed ” by the judge’s decision.
Revised:  However, the two women say civil partnerships are not good enough for gay couples After the hearing, Ms Wilkinson said she and Ms Kitzinger were deeply disappointed by the judge’s decision.
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Original:  She said they had been “stripped ” of their marriage by a judge who believes the “traditional notion ” of marriage as being between a man and a woman so they can create children.
Revised:  She said they had been stripped of their marriage by a judge who believes the “traditional notion ” of marriage as being between a man and a woman so they can create children.
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Original:  She said they had been “stripped ” of their marriage by a judge who believes the “traditional notion ” of marriage as being between a man and a woman so they can create children.
Revised:  She said they had been “stripped ” of their marriage by a judge who believes the traditional notion of marriage as being between a man and a woman so they can create children.
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Original:  However, the two women say civil partnerships are not good enough for gay couples 
Revised:  However, the two women say civil partnerships are not good enough for gay couples .
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Original:  The resolution was passed under Article 40, Chapter VII of the  UN Charter, which sets the stage for possible economic sanctions if Iran does not comply with the resolution, but does not authorise military action.
Revised:  The resolution was passed under Article 40, Chapter VII of the w: UN Charter, which sets the stage for possible economic sanctions if Iran does not comply with the resolution, but does not authorise military action.
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Original:  The resolution was passed under Article 40, Chapter VII of the w:UN Charter  , which sets the stage for possible economic sanctions if Iran does not comply with the resolution, but does not authorise military action.
Revised:  The resolution was passed under Article 40, Chapter VII of the w:United Nations Charter , which sets the stage for possible economic sanctions if Iran does not comply with the resolution, but does not authorise military action.
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Original:  The resolution was passed under Article 40, Chapter VII of the w:United Nations Charter |UN Charter , which sets the stage for possible economic sanctions if Iran does not comply with the resolution, but does not authorise military action.
Revised:  The resolution was passed under Article 40, Chapter VII of the |UN Charter , which sets the stage for possible economic sanctions if Iran does not comply with the resolution, but does not authorise military action.
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Original:  The resolution was passed under Article 40, Chapter VII of the w:United Nations Charter |UN Charter , which sets the stage for possible economic sanctions if Iran does not comply with the resolution, but does not authorise military action.
Revised:  The resolution was passed under Article 40, Chapter VII of the w:United Nations Charter UN Charter , which sets the stage for possible economic sanctions if Iran does not comply with the resolution, but does not authorise military action.
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Original: Of the major industrialized nations, the USA elected president Mr. asshole gorge bush and Australia are notable absentees from the list of signatories.
Revised: Of the major industrialized nations, the USA and Australia are notable absentees from the list of signatories.
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Original:  The United States produces more CO2 emissions than any other single country in the world, although US emissions are significantly lower than many signatories in terms of efficiency, i.e. emissions per unit of output .
Revised:  The United States produces more CO2 emissions than any other single country in the world, both in total and also per capita .
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Original: Mel Gibson made anti-semetic remarks after being pulled over for drunk driving, having a blood alcohol level of .12.
Revised: Mel Gibson made anti-semitic remarks after being pulled over for drunk driving, having a blood alcohol level of .12.
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Original:  After being pulled over Gibson proceeded to state that " The ]  Jews are responsible for all the wars in the world," and then  asked the deputy: "Are you a Jew? 
Revised:  After being pulled over Gibson proceeded to state that " The sic] Jews are responsible for all the wars in the world," and then asked the deputy: "Are you a Jew? 
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Original:  After being pulled over Gibson proceeded to state that " The ]  Jews are responsible for all the wars in the world," and then  asked the deputy: "Are you a Jew? 
Revised:  After being pulled over Gibson proceeded to state that " The ] Jews are responsible for all the wars in the world," and then he asked the deputy: "Are you a Jew? 
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Original:  He also is reported to have referred to a female police officer as "sugar tits"  
Revised:  He also is reported to have referred to a female police officer as "sugar tits" . 
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Original: Category:July 31, 2006 Category:Mexico Category:North America Category:Politics and conflicts 200px|Andrés Manuel López Obrador MEXICO – Tents began sprouting in Mexico’s capital Sunday afternoon after leftist presidential candidate Andres Manuel López Obrador called on his supporters to set up camp on the capital until a recount is ordered by the Federal Electoral Tribunal.
Revised:  200px|Andrés Manuel López Obrador MEXICO – Tents began sprouting in Mexico’s capital Sunday afternoon after leftist presidential candidate Andres Manuel López Obrador called on his supporters to set up camp on the capital until a recount is ordered by the Federal Electoral Tribunal.
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