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Original:  In the statement released by Bartlett to his Facebook followers, he said that his seven-day week had meant he had no time to be a father to his young children, Matilda and Hudson . “ Working seven days a week and wanting to be a better father for Hudson and Matilda has become incompatible as the children are growing up. ” Set to take the reigns is deputy premier, Lara Giddings.
Revised:  The statement said his seven-day week had meant he had no time to be a father to his young children, Matilda and Hudson . “ Working seven days a week and wanting to be a better father for Hudson and Matilda has become incompatible as the children are growing up. ” Set to take the reigns is deputy premier, Lara Giddings.
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Original:  In the statement released by Bartlett to his Facebook followers, he said that his seven-day week had meant he had no time to be a father to his young children, Matilda and Hudson . “ Working seven days a week and wanting to be a better father for Hudson and Matilda has become incompatible as the children are growing up. ” Set to take the reigns is deputy premier, Lara Giddings.
Revised:  In the statement released by Bartlett to his Facebook followers, he said that his seven-day week had meant he had no time to be a father to his young children, Matilda and Hudson : " Working seven days a week and wanting to be a better father for Hudson and Matilda has become incompatible as the children are growing up. ” Set to take the reigns is deputy premier, Lara Giddings.
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Original:  In the statement released by Bartlett to his Facebook followers, he said that his seven-day week had meant he had no time to be a father to his young children, Matilda and Hudson . “ Working seven days a week and wanting to be a better father for Hudson and Matilda has become incompatible as the children are growing up. ” Set to take the reigns is deputy premier, Lara Giddings.
Revised:  In the statement released by Bartlett to his Facebook followers, he said that his seven-day week had meant he had no time to be a father to his young children, Matilda and Hudson . “ Working seven days a week and wanting to be a better father for Hudson and Matilda has become incompatible as the children are growing up. " Set to take the reigns is deputy premier, Lara Giddings.
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Original:  In the statement released by Bartlett to his Facebook followers, he said that his seven-day week had meant he had no time to be a father to his young children, Matilda and Hudson . “ Working seven days a week and wanting to be a better father for Hudson and Matilda has become incompatible as the children are growing up. ” Set to take the reigns is deputy premier, Lara Giddings.
Revised:  In the statement released by Bartlett to his Facebook followers, he said that his seven-day week had meant he had no time to be a father to his young children, Matilda and Hudson . “ Working seven days a week and wanting to be a better father for Hudson and Matilda has become incompatible as the children are growing up. ” Set to take the reigns is Deputy Premier Lara Giddings.
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Original:  Ms. Giddings has also received the support of the out-going premier.
Revised:  Giddings has also received the support of the out-going premier.
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Original:  ” Bartlett, only in a relatively new government, won government after a hung parliament in the 2010 elections with Labor and the Greens forming a minority government after three weeks.
Revised:  " Bartlett, only in a relatively new government, won government after a hung parliament in the 2010 elections with Labor and the Greens forming a minority government after three weeks.
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Original:  ” Bartlett, only in a relatively new government, won government after a hung parliament in the 2010 elections with Labor and the Greens forming a minority government after three weeks.
Revised:  ” Bartlett, who was in a relatively new government, won government after a hung parliament in the 2010 elections with Labor and the Greens forming a minority government after three weeks.
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Original:  ” Bartlett, only in a relatively new government, won government after a hung parliament in the 2010 elections with Labor and the Greens forming a minority government after three weeks.
Revised:  ” Bartlett, only in a relatively new government, won office after a hung parliament in the 2010 elections with Labor and the Greens forming a minority government after three weeks.
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Original:  He had succeeded the also resigned , Paul Lennon two years ago.
Revised:  He had succeeded the also resigned Paul Lennon two years ago.
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Original:  Mr. Bartlett leaves the Labor party with opinion polls showing discontent with the government.
Revised:  Bartlett leaves the Labor party with opinion polls showing discontent with the government.
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Original:  In an unforeseen decision, the Premier of the Australian state Tasmania has resigned as leader of the governing  Labor party.
Revised:  In an unforeseen decision, the Premier of the Australian state Tasmania has resigned as leader of the governing Tasmanian Labor party.
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Original:  Despite this, sources say that there was no chance of a leadership change so early after the election and that Bartlett's position in the party was not under threat
Revised:  Despite this, there was no chance of a leadership change so early after the election and that Bartlett's position in the party was not under threat
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Original:  Despite this, sources say that there was no chance of a leadership change so early after the election and that Bartlett's position in the party was not under threat
Revised:  Despite this, sources say that there was no chance of a leadership change so early after the election and Bartlett's position in the party was not under threat
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Original: BAGHDAD - A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings  Sunni political leaders into the political mainstream and reduced fears that Iraq was descending into civil war.
Revised:  A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings Sunni political leaders into the political mainstream and reduced fears that Iraq was descending into civil war.
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Original: BAGHDAD - A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings  Sunni political leaders into the political mainstream and reduced fears that Iraq was descending into civil war.
Revised: BAGHDAD - A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings some Sunni political leaders into the political mainstream and reduced fears that Iraq was descending into civil war.
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Original:  The Iraqi Islamic Party, decided on Tuesday to support the new constitution - according to a party source  "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote 'Yes'." Iraq's parliament moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
Revised:  The Iraqi Islamic Party, decided on Tuesday to support the new constitution ; according to a party source "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote 'Yes'." Iraq's parliament moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
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Original:  The Iraqi Islamic Party, decided on Tuesday to support the new constitution - according to a party source  "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote 'Yes'." Iraq's parliament moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
Revised:  The Iraqi Islamic Party, decided on Tuesday to support the new constitution - according to a party source , "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote 'Yes'." Iraq's parliament moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
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Original:  State Department spokesman Adam Ereli said the agreement  " shows , frankly, that the political process in Iraq is working."
Revised:  State Department spokesman Adam Ereli said the agreement , " shows , frankly, that the political process in Iraq is working."
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Original:  State Department spokesman Adam Ereli said the agreement  " shows , frankly, that the political process in Iraq is working."
Revised:  State Department spokesman Adam Ereli said the agreement " Shows , frankly, that the political process in Iraq is working."
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Original:  Other Sunni political groups have maintained their opposition to the constitution and are urging either a boycott or a "No" vote on Saturday, arguing that the charter could break up the state and hand too much power to Shi'ites and Kurds  
Revised:  Other Sunni political groups have maintained their opposition to the constitution and are urging either a boycott or a "No" vote on Saturday, arguing that the charter could break up the state and hand too much power to Shi'ites and Kurds . 
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Original: Until today, an ongoing bombing campaign by Sunni extremists aimed at derailing the referendum led many outside observers to believe that Iraq's fragile new democracy was falling prey to sectarian violence.
Revised: An ongoing bombing campaign by Sunni extremists aimed at derailing the referendum led many outside observers to believe that Iraq's fragile new democracy was falling prey to sectarian violence.
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Original: A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings some Sunni political leaders into the political mainstream and reduced fears that Iraq was descending into civil war.
Revised: A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings one Sunni party into the political mainstream and reduced fears that Iraq was descending into civil war.
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Original:  Other Sunni political groups have maintained their opposition to the constitution and are urging either a boycott or a "No" vote on Saturday, arguing that the charter could break up the state and hand too much power to Shi'ites and Kurds .
Revised:  Most Sunni political groups have maintained their opposition to the constitution and are urging either a boycott or a "No" vote on Saturday, arguing that the charter could break up the state and hand too much power to Shi'ites and Kurds .
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Original:  Other Sunni political groups have maintained their opposition to the constitution and are urging either a boycott or a "No" vote on Saturday, arguing that the charter could break up the state and hand too much power to Shi'ites and Kurds .
Revised:  Other Sunni political groups have maintained their opposition to the constitution and are urging either a boycott or a "No" vote on Saturday, arguing that the charter could break up the state and hand too much power to Shi'ites and Kurds 
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Original: A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings one Sunni party into the political mainstream and approval from the US government .
Revised: A last minute Constitutional Deal has been struck that brings one Sunni party into the political mainstream and approval from the US government .
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Original: A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings one Sunni party into the political mainstream and approval from the US government .
Revised: A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings one Sunni Party into the political mainstream and approval from the US government .
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Original: A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings one Sunni party into the political mainstream and approval from the US government .
Revised: A last minute constitutional deal has been struck that brings one Sunni party into the political mainstream and approval from the US Government .
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Original:  The Iraqi Islamic Party,  decided on Tuesday to support the new constitution;
Revised:  The Iraqi Islamic Party, has decided on Tuesday to support the new constitution;
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Original:  according to a party source, "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote  'Yes'." Iraq's parliament  moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
Revised:  according to a party source, "Some of our demands have been met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote 'Yes'." Iraq's parliament moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
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Original:  according to a party source, "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote  'Yes'." Iraq's parliament  moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
Revised:  according to a party source, "Some of our demands were met so the Party endorsed the Constitution and urged the people to vote 'Yes'." Iraq's parliament moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
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Original:  according to a party source, "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote  'Yes'." Iraq's parliament  moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
Revised:  according to a party source, "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote , 'Yes'." Iraq's parliament moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
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Original:  according to a party source, "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote  'Yes'." Iraq's parliament  moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
Revised:  according to a party source, "Some of our demands were met so the party has endorsed the constitution and is urging people to vote 'Yes'." Iraq's parliament has moved immediately to ratify the changes just days before the nationwide constitutional referendum on October 15th.
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Original:  The Bush administration  welcomed the news of a breakthrough;
Revised:  The Bush administration has welcomed the news of a breakthrough;
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Original:  The Bush administration  welcomed the news of a breakthrough;
Revised:  The Bush administration welcomed the news as a breakthrough;
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Original:  State Department spokesman Adam Ereli said the agreement , "Shows, frankly, that the political process in Iraq is working."
Revised:  State Department spokesman Adam Ereli has said the Agreement , "Shows, frankly, that the political process in Iraq is working."
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Original:  The final decision on lifting Presidential immunity now falls to Congress .
Revised:  The final decision on lifting Presidential immunity now falls to .
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Original: The Guatemalan yesterday approved a request by the attorney general to impeach Guatemalan President . President Molina, pictured here in 2013, is accused of corruption.
Revised: Yesterday in Guatemala, the approved the attorney general to impeach Guatemalan President . President Molina, pictured here in 2013, is accused of corruption.
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Original: The Guatemalan yesterday approved a request by the attorney general to impeach Guatemalan President . President Molina, pictured here in 2013, is accused of corruption.
Revised: The Guatemalan yesterday approved a request by the attorney general 's request to impeach President . President Molina, pictured here in 2013, is accused of corruption.
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Original:  It should be noted, however, that there is a feature where you will be able to plug your iPod into your television, and view video there .
Revised:  However, iPod owners will be able to plug your iPod into your television, and view video there .
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Original: The  Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center, in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
Revised: The new iMac The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center, in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
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Original: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
Revised: The new iMac New iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
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Original: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
Revised: The new iMac new iMac G5 The video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
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Original: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
Revised: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new model of its iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
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Original: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
Revised: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which features a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
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Original: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
Revised: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control that allows the iMac to act as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
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Original: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center , in addition to regular functions as a personal computer.
Revised: The new iMac new iMac G5 The Video iPod was announced along with a new version of iMac G5, which is thinner than the older version (announced last year), has a remote control and is meant to function as a home media center as well as a normal personal computer.
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Original:  Some customers have complained however that this iMac is missing functionality out-of-the-box that allows a user to watch TV on it   .
Revised:  Some customers have complained however that this iMac is missing functionality out-of-the-box that allows a user to watch TV on it . .
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Original: The death toll from the earthquake and tsunamis that  hit countries in Asia and Eastern Africa continues to rise, passing 80,000 people according to reports from several news agencies.
Revised: The death toll from the earthquake and tsunamis that has hit countries in Asia and Eastern Africa continues to rise, passing 80,000 people according to reports from several news agencies.
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Original:  The lawsuit was started after the dutch minister of justice Donneragreed on the extradition.
Revised:  The lawsuit was started after the Dutch Minister of Justice, Piet Hein Donner, agreed to the extradition.
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Original: 240px|Saddam Hussein As the start date of the former Iraqi leader's trial approaches, the chief judge of the tribunal has stated that the fate of Saddam Hussein will be broadcast on live television.
Revised: 240px|Saddam Hussein As the start date of the former Iraqi leader's trial approaches, the chief judge of the tribunal has stated that the fate of Sodom Hussein will be broadcast on live television.
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Original: 240px|Saddam Hussein As the start date of the former Iraqi leader's trial approaches, the chief judge of the tribunal has stated that the fate of Sodom Hussein will be broadcast on live television.
Revised: 240px|Saddam Hussein As the start date of the former Iraqi leader's trial approaches, the chief judge of the tribunal has stated that the fate of Saddam Hussein will be broadcast on live television.
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Original:  The third pillar is to actually call Bush, Bill Clinton, George H.W. Bush, and Donald Rumsfeld to testify.
Revised:  The third pillar is to call Bush, Bill Clinton, George H.W. Bush, and Donald Rumsfeld to testify.
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Original: File:TrialSaddam.jpg|240px|Saddam Hussein during his first appearance before the Iraqi Special Tribunal As the start date of the former Iraqi leader's trial approaches, the chief judge of the tribunal has stated that the fate of Saddam Hussein will be broadcast on live television.
Revised:  As the start date of the former Iraqi leader's trial approaches, the chief judge of the tribunal has stated that the fate of Saddam Hussein will be broadcast on live television.
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Original:  Kiir, the only leader in South Sudan since independence in 2011, sought an extension of a two-week deadline but signed yesterday after United Nations sanctions were threatened   
Revised:  Kiir, the only leader in South Sudan since independence in 2011, sought an extension of a two-week deadline but signed yesterday after United Nations sanctions were threatened . 
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Original: ile :Salva Kiir Mayardit at the White House (cropped).jpg|Salva Kiir in the United States last year.
Revised: File :Salva Kiir Mayardit at the White House (cropped).jpg|Salva Kiir in the United States last year.
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Original: Ugandan President Yoweri Museveni , Ethiopian Prime Minister Hailemariam Desalegn , Kenyan President Uhuru Kenyatta , and UN secretary-general Ban Ki-moon all expressed their approval of the deal's signing.
Revised: Ugandan President , Ethiopian Prime Minister Hailemariam Desalegn , Kenyan President Uhuru Kenyatta , and UN secretary-general Ban Ki-moon all expressed their approval of the deal's signing.
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