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Original: The shooting came after a shooting at the campus of killed nine people last week .
Revised: The shooting came after a shooting at the campus of .
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Original: A near the student housing complex of , in  , , on Friday has killed one student, and left another person injured in serious, but stable, condition.
Revised: A near the student housing complex of , in , on Friday has killed one student, and left another person injured in serious, but stable, condition.
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Original: Western Honey Bee Scientists working for United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP) reported yesterday that the collapse of honey bee colonies is becoming a world wide phenomena and will continue unless humans work to restore habitats for bees necessary for pollinating crops.
Revised: Western Honey Bee Scientists working for United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP) reported Thurdsay that the collapse of honey bee colonies is becoming a world wide phenomena and will continue unless humans work to restore habitats for bees necessary for pollinating crops.
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Original:  Contributing factors include the declines in flowering plants, the use of harmful chemicals and insecticides, the increase in air pollution and a worldwide trade system that spreads bee pathogens and pests.
Revised:  Additional factors include the declines in flowering plants, the use of harmful chemicals and insecticides, the increase in air pollution and a worldwide trade system that spreads bee pathogens and pests.
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Original:  Noting that humans seem to believe that they can operate independent of nature through technological innovations, Achim Steiner, the executive director of the UNEP said, "Bees underline the reality that we are more, not less dependent on nature's services in a world of close to 7 billion people."
Revised:  Noting that humans seem to believe that they can operate independent of nature through technological innovations, Achim Steiner, the executive director of the UNEP said, "Bees underline the reality that we are more, not less dependent on in a world of close to 7 billion people."
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Original:  The insects are necessary for crops and the report calls for profound changes in how humans manage the planet .
Revised:  The insects are necessary for crops and the report calls for profound changes in how humans .
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Original: Western Honey Bee  Scientists working for the United Nations (UNEP) reported Thursday that the collapse of colonies is becoming a world wide phenomenon and will continue unless humans work to restore habitats for bees.
Revised: Western Honey Bee . Scientists working for the United Nations (UNEP) reported Thursday that the collapse of colonies is becoming a world wide phenomenon and will continue unless humans work to restore habitats for bees.
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Original: Peter Costello  speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, seemed to contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, Costello said "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules , " he said .
Revised: Peter Costello , speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, seemed to contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, Costello said "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules , " he said .
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Original: Peter Costello  speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, seemed to contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, Costello said "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules , " he said .
Revised: Peter Costello speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, apparently contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, Costello said "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules , " he said .
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Original: Peter Costello  speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, seemed to contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, Costello said "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules , " he said .
Revised: Peter Costello speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, seemed to contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, saying, "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules , " he said .
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Original: Peter Costello  speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, seemed to contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, Costello said "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules , " he said .
Revised: Peter Costello speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, seemed to contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, Costello said "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules " he said .
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Original: Peter Costello  speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, seemed to contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, Costello said "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules , " he said .
Revised: Peter Costello speaking to The Age Newspaper for the first time on the issue, seemed to contradicted earlier statements made by the PM, Costello said "Unfortunately nobody ever finally knows these things until such time as the court rules , " .
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Original:  Opposition Leader Kim Beazley, who was outraged that the Government had chosen Melbourne Cup Day as a cover to introduce the Bills, pointed out that how at odds the Treasurer and the Prime Minister were  .
Revised:  Opposition Leader Kim Beazley, who was outraged that the Government had chosen Melbourne Cup Day as a cover to introduce the Bills, pointed out that the Treasurer and the Prime Minister were .
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Original:  Opposition Leader Kim Beazley, who was outraged that the Government had chosen Melbourne Cup Day as a cover to introduce the Bills, pointed out that how at odds the Treasurer and the Prime Minister were  .
Revised:  Opposition Leader Kim Beazley, who was outraged that the Government had chosen Melbourne Cup Day as a cover to introduce the Bills, pointed out that how at odds the Treasurer and the Prime Minister were at odds .
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Original:  Mr Howard said there was nothing of concern in legal advice from the Solicitor-General and he remained convinced the laws were constitutional, but did concede to changes to the so called “shoot-to-kill” provisions for police.
Revised:  Mr Howard said there was nothing of concern in legal advice from the Solicitor-General and he remained convinced the laws were constitutional, but did concede to changes to the so-called “shoot-to-kill” provisions for police.
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Original:  ACT Chief Minister Jon Stanhope, along with his Queensland, Western Australia and Tasmanian counterparts have asked for a rescheduling on the introduction of the new laws because they may be unconstitutional.
Revised:  ACT Chief Minister Jon Stanhope, along with his Queensland, Western Australian, and Tasmanian counterparts have asked for a rescheduling on the introduction of the new laws because they may be unconstitutional.
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Original:  ACT Chief Minister Jon Stanhope, along with his Queensland, Western Australia and Tasmanian counterparts have asked for a rescheduling on the introduction of the new laws because they may be unconstitutional.
Revised:  ACT Chief Minister Jon Stanhope, along with his Queensland, Western Australia and Tasmanian counterparts , has asked for a rescheduling on the introduction of the new laws because they may be unconstitutional.
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Original:  Opposition Leader Kim Beazley, who was outraged that the Government had chosen Melbourne Cup Day as a cover to introduce the Bills, pointed out that the Treasurer and the Prime Minister were at odds.
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Original:  ACT Chief Minister Jon Stanhope, along with his Queensland , Western Australian, and Tasmanian counterparts, has asked for a rescheduling on the introduction of the new laws because they may be unconstitutional.
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Original:  Mr Stanhope said there were severe deficiencies in the planned judicial reviews, the new laws of sedition, and other human rights issues .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Federal Government requires the support of a least four states to give the final legislation the go-ahead .
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Federal Government requires the support of a least four states to give the final legislation the go-ahead .
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Original:  There is no means of reviewing what has been done once its happened."
Revised:  There is no means of reviewing what has been done once it's happened."
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Original:  Mr Howard said he was not committed to introducing the changes next week, although he wanted them up and running by Christmas.
Revised:  Mr Howard said he was not committed to introducing the changes next week, although he wanted them by Christmas.
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Original: Dupont's video was first broadcasted  the Australian television network SBS earlier this month, showing footage of US soldiers burning bodies in a desertous region of Afghanistan.
Revised: Dupont's video was first broadcasted by the Australian television network SBS earlier this month, showing footage of US soldiers burning bodies in a desertous region of Afghanistan.
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Original:  The issue has since sparked large controversy worldwide, questioning rather or not the soldiers violated sections of the Geneva Convention as a result of the burnings .
Revised:  The issue has many questioning whether the burnings violated sections of the Geneva Convention as a result of the burnings .
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Original:  The issue has since sparked large controversy worldwide, questioning rather or not the soldiers violated sections of the Geneva Convention as a result of the burnings .
Revised:  The issue has since sparked large controversy worldwide, questioning rather or not the soldiers violated sections of the Geneva Conventions .
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Original:  However, on October 21, Dupont appeared on the NPR talk show All Things Considered, where he claimed in an interview that the bodies that were shown as burning were burned either from order by officials, or for hygiene concerns when locals would not retrieve the bodies.
Revised:  However, on October 21, Dupont appeared on the NPR talk show All Things Considered, and claimed in an interview that the bodies that were shown as burning were burned either from order by officials, or for hygiene concerns when locals would not retrieve the bodies.
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Original:  However, on October 21, Dupont appeared on the NPR talk show All Things Considered, where he claimed in an interview that the bodies that were shown as burning were burned either from order by officials, or for hygiene concerns when locals would not retrieve the bodies.
Revised:  However, on October 21, Dupont appeared on the NPR talk show All Things Considered, where he claimed in an interview that the bodies were either burned under orders from officials, or for hygiene concerns when locals would not retrieve the bodies.
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Original:  However, on October 21, Dupont appeared on the NPR talk show All Things Considered, where he claimed in an interview that the bodies that were shown as burning were burned either from order by officials, or for hygiene concerns when locals would not retrieve the bodies.
Revised:  However, on October 21, Dupont appeared on the NPR talk show All Things Considered, where he claimed in an interview that the bodies that were shown as burning were burned either from order by officials, or for hygiene concerns brought forth when locals did not retrieve the bodies.
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Original:  Both the Afghanistan government and the U.S. Army have begun investigations into the claims.
Revised:  Both the Afghan government and the U.S. Army have begun investigations into the claims.
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Original:  During an initial interview with the station  , Dupont said the following about the video: "They [ soldiers ] used that as a psychological warfare, I guess you'd call it.
Revised:  During an interview with the station , Dupont said the following about the video: "They [ soldiers ] used that as a psychological warfare, I guess you'd call it.
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Original:  During an initial interview with the station  , Dupont said the following about the video: "They [ soldiers ] used that as a psychological warfare, I guess you'd call it.
Revised:  During an initial interview with the station , Dupont said , "They [ soldiers ] used that as a psychological warfare, I guess you'd call it.
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Original:  They used the fact that the Taliban were burned facing west [ toward Mecca].
Revised:  They used the fact that the Taliban were burned facing west [ towards Mecca].
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Original:   They deliberately wanted to incite that much anger from the Taliban so the Taliban could attack them. ...
Revised:  ... They deliberately wanted to incite that much anger from the Taliban so the Taliban could attack them. ...
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Original: Stephen Dupont, the Australian video journalist whose footage of U.S. soldiers burning corpses in Afghanistan sparked worldwide controversy, is now denying any claims made by others that the bodies in the footage were burned in a disrespectable fashion.
Revised: Stephen Dupont, the Australian video journalist whose footage of U.S. soldiers burning corpses in Afghanistan sparked worldwide controversy, is denying any claims made by others that the bodies in the footage were burned in a disrespectable fashion.
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Original:  During an interview with the station regarding his footage, Dupont said, "They [ w:Psychological operations| PSY-OPS ] used that as a psychological warfare, I guess you'd call it.
Revised:  During an interview with the station regarding his footage, Dupont said, "They [ PSY-OPS ] used that as a psychological warfare, I guess you'd call it.
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Original:  However, on October 21, Dupont appeared on the NPR talk show All Things Considered , and claimed in an interview  that the bodies were either burned under orders from officials, or for hygiene concerns brought forth when locals did not retrieve the bodies.
Revised:  However, on October 21, Dupont appeared on the NPR talk show All Things Considered , and claimed in an interview , reiterating that the bodies were either burned under orders from officials, or for hygiene concerns brought forth when locals did not retrieve the bodies.
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Original:  Dupont has also retracted the claim that the bodies were facing toward Mecca, saying: "Look, the bodies as far as I’m concerned, the bodies were lying on the ground, they weren’t facing anywhere, they were just lying there."
Revised:  Dupont also corrected reports that the bodies were facing toward Mecca, saying: "Look, the bodies as far as I’m concerned, the bodies were lying on the ground, they weren’t facing anywhere, they were just lying there."
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Original:  This ties with the less controversial detail from the earlier SBS interviewer where he remarked that, to his knowledge, the solders responsible for the burning were carrying out orders based on hygene requirements.
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Original: |It reminds me of 4 October 1994 after an earthquake in Russia provoked a tsunami throughout the Pacific%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , when we had to leave everything and either go to or Santa Cruz a fisherman told Wikinews.
Revised: |It reminds me of 4 October 1994 %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , when we had to leave everything and either go to or Santa Cruz a fisherman told Wikinews.
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Original: |It reminds me of 4 October 1994 after an earthquake in Russia provoked a tsunami throughout the Pacific%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , when we had to leave everything and either go to or Santa Cruz a fisherman told Wikinews.
Revised: |It reminds me of 4 October 1994 after an earthquake in Russia provoked a tsunami throughout the Pacific%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% a fisherman told Wikinews.
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Original: The Chicago White Sox won the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in North America, by sweeping (winning) all 4 World Series games against the Houston Astros, who won no games in the series.
Revised: The Chicago White Sox won the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in North America, by sweeping (winning) all four World Series games against the Houston Astros, who won no games in the series.
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Original: The Chicago White Sox won the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in North America, by sweeping (winning) all 4 World Series games against the Houston Astros, who won no games in the series.
Revised: The Chicago White Sox won the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in North America, by sweeping (winning) all 4 World Series games against the Houston Astros, who were winless in the series.
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Original:  Tonight at Minute Maid Park at Houston, the final game was won by the White Sox by a score of 1 - 0. The only run was scored in the 8th inning
Revised:  Tonight at Minute Maid Park in Houston, the final game was won by the White Sox by a score of 1 - 0. The only run was scored in the 8th inning
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Original:  Tonight at Minute Maid Park at Houston, the final game was won by the White Sox by a score of 1 - 0. The only run was scored in the 8th inning
Revised:  Tonight at Minute Maid Park at Houston, the White Sox won the final game by a score of 1 - 0. The only run was scored in the 8th inning
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Original:  Tonight at Minute Maid Park at Houston, the final game was won by the White Sox by a score of 1 - 0. The only run was scored in the 8th inning
Revised:  Tonight at Minute Maid Park at Houston, the final game was won by the White Sox by a score of 1 - 0. They scored the game's only run in the eighth inning
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Original: The Chicago White Sox won the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in North America, by sweeping (winning) all four World Series games against the Houston Astros, who were winless in the series.
Revised: The Chicago White Sox won the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in the United States of America, by sweeping (winning) all four World Series games against the Houston Astros, who were winless in the series.
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Original:  Tonight at Minute Maid Park in Houston, the White Sox won the final game by a score of 1 - 0. They scored the game's only run in the eighth inning
Revised:  Tonight at Minute Maid Park in Houston, the White Sox won the final game by a score of 1 - 0, scoring the game's only run in the eighth inning
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Original: The Chicago White Sox won the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in the United States of America, by sweeping (winning) all four World Series games against the Houston Astros , who were winless in the series .
Revised: The Chicago White Sox won the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in the United States of America, defeating the Houston Astros , who were winless in the series .
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Original: The Chicago White Sox won the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in the United States of America, defeating the Houston Astros four games to zero.
Revised: The Chicago White Sox win the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in the United States of America, defeating the Houston Astros four games to zero.
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Original:  The Chicago White Sox win the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in the United States of America and Canada, defeating the Houston Astros four games to zero, a series sweep.
Revised: right The Chicago White Sox win the 2005 World Series, the ultimate championship of baseball in the United States of America and Canada, defeating the Houston Astros four games to zero, a series sweep.
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Original: The proposal was settled upon during a six hour long emergency meeting at League headquarters, with only Algeria and Syria in opposition.
Revised: The proposal was settled upon during a six-hour-long emergency meeting at League headquarters, with only Algeria and Syria in opposition.
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Original: The proposal was settled upon during a six hour long emergency meeting at League headquarters, with only Algeria and Syria in opposition.
Revised: The proposal was settled upon during a six hour long emergency meeting at the Arab League's headquarters, with only Algeria and Syria in opposition.
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Original:  According to Amr Moussa, the secretary-general of the League , it had "officially requested the United Nations Security Council to impose a no-fly zone against any military action against the Libyan people."
Revised:  According to Amr Moussa, the organization's secretary general , it had "officially requested the United Nations Security Council to impose a no-fly zone against any military action against the Libyan people."
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Original:  According to onlookers, some members of the League, such as Saudi Arabia and Algeria, are concerned about establishing a no-fly zone because protests have taken place there , and they worry that uprisings similar to the Libyan one could occur in their countries .
Revised:  According to onlookers, some members of the League, including Saudi Arabia and Algeria, are concerned about establishing a no-fly zone because protests have taken place there , and they worry that uprisings similar to the Libyan one could occur in their countries .
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Original:  According to onlookers, some members of the League, such as Saudi Arabia and Algeria, are concerned about establishing a no-fly zone because protests have taken place there , and they worry that uprisings similar to the Libyan one could occur in their countries .
Revised:  According to onlookers, some members of the League, such as Saudi Arabia and Algeria, are concerned about establishing a no-fly zone because protests have taken place there , and they worry that uprisings similar to the Libyan one could occur .
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Original:  Additionally, even though the League voted in favor of a no-fly zone, other analysts say that internal dissent could lead to them going no further than stating their support.
Revised:  Additionally, even though the League voted in favor of a no-fly zone, other analysts say internal dissent could lead to them going no further than stating their support.
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Original:  According to British foreign secretary William Hague, " you need support within the region from the Arab world" for a no-fly zone , and " we would like Arab nations to participate in it militarily.
Revised:  According to Britain's Foreign Secretary, William Hague, " you need support within the region from the Arab world" for a no-fly zone , and " we would like Arab nations to participate in it militarily.
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Original:  According to British foreign secretary William Hague, " you need support within the region from the Arab world" for a no-fly zone , and " we would like Arab nations to participate in it militarily.
Revised:  According to British foreign secretary William Hague, " You need support within the region from the Arab world" for a no-fly zone , and " we would like Arab nations to participate in it militarily.
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