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Original: A Stop Light Party, Stoplight Party, Traffic Light Party or Traffic Party is a party at which guests wear different colors indicating their relationship-seeking status.
Revised: A stop light party, stoplight party, traffic light party or traffic party is a party at which guests wear different colors indicating their relationship-seeking status.
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Original: Concept The basic idea of the party is that the person enters the room and receives a bright color ( light stick or glow necklace ) or wears a color that best suits their status .
Revised: Concept The basic idea of the party is that the person enters the room and selects a light stick or glow necklace ) or wears a color that best suits their status .
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Original: Concept The basic idea of the party is that the person enters the room and receives a bright color ( light stick or glow necklace ) or wears a color that best suits their status .
Revised: Concept The basic idea of the party is that the person enters the room and receives a bright color ( light stick or glow necklace in a color that best suits their status .
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Original:  After years of creating a local buzz the party received national attention in 2005 after the Times Union newspaper in Albany, NY ran a feature story about it.
Revised:  After years of creating a local buzz the party received national attention in 2005 after the Albany Times Union ran a feature story about it.
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Original:  Usually, the color green means that one is single and looking for a relationship.
Revised:  The color green means that one is single and looking for a relationship.
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Original:  ZTA Stoplight Party highlights busy week - Features While they may be held anytime, anywhere, they are commonly held around Valentine's Day and in areas around colleges and universities.
Revised:  While they may be held anytime, anywhere, they are commonly held around Valentine's Day and in areas around colleges and universities.
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Original:  ZTA Stoplight Party highlights busy week - Features History The earliest documented examples of a Stoplight or Traffic Party held in the public setting can be traced back to the late 1990s and the college town of Albany in upstate New York, where a promoter named Bill Kennedy was throwing them in nightlife venues across the city.
Revised:  History The earliest documented examples of a Stoplight or Traffic Party held in the public setting can be traced back to the late 1990s and the college town of Albany in upstate New York, where a promoter named Bill Kennedy was throwing them in nightlife venues across the city.
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Original:  ZTA Stoplight Party highlights busy week - Features History The earliest documented examples of a Stoplight or Traffic Party held in the public setting can be traced back to the late 1990s and the college town of Albany in upstate New York, where a promoter named Bill Kennedy was throwing them in nightlife venues across the city.
Revised:  ZTA Stoplight Party highlights busy week - Features History The earliest documented examples of a Stop Light or Traffic Light Party held in the public setting can be traced back to the late 1990s and the college town of Albany in upstate New York, where a promoter named Bill Kennedy was throwing them in nightlife venues across the city.
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Original:  After years of creating a local buzz  the party received national attention in 2005 after the Albany Times Union ran a feature story about it.
Revised:  After years of creating a local buzz , the party received national attention in 2005 after the Albany Times Union ran a feature story about it.
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Original:  The Associated Press (AP) picked up on the story and it ran nationally on the front page of papers across URL Internet dating site Match.com ran a feature story and after that and the party went “viral."
Revised:  The Associated Press (AP) picked up on the story and it ran nationally on the front page of papers across URL Internet dating site Match.com ran a feature story and after that and the concept went “viral."
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Original:  The Associated Press (AP) picked up on the story and it ran nationally on the front page of papers across URL Internet dating site Match.com ran a feature story and after that and the concept went “viral."
Revised:  The Associated Press (AP) picked up on the story and it ran nationally on the front page of papers across America. Internet dating site Match.com ran a feature story and after that and the concept went “viral."
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Original:  It has been thrown in venues across the world since receiving extensive media URL
Revised:  It has been thrown in venues across the world since receiving extensive media coverage.
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Original:  La Creación, 1922", Antiguo Colegio de San Ildefonso La molendera (1926) Portrait by photographers Edward Weston and Tina Modotti (1940) References Category:1897 births Category:1965 deaths Category:Road accident deaths in Mexico Category:Indigenous Mexicans Category:Nahua people Category:Translators from Nahuatl Category:Mexican artists' models Category:Mexican Mesoamericanists Category:20th-century Mesoamericanis
Revised:  La Creación, 1922", Antiguo Colegio de San Ildefonso La molendera (1926) Portrait by photographers Edward Weston and Tina Modotti (1940) References Category:1897 births Category:1965 deaths Category:Road accident deaths in Mexico Category:Indigenous Mexicans Category:Nahua people Category:Translators from Nahuatl Category:Mexican artists' models Category:Mexican Mesoamericanists Category:20th-century Mesoamericanists Category:20th-century translato
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Original:  Fuente de los Cántaros ("Fountain of the Jugs", by José María Fernández Urbina) in Parque México, Condesa, Mexico City Diego Rivera: La Creación, (1922), San Ildefonso College, then the National Preparatory School"Diego Rivera (1886-1957): La Creación, 1922", Antiguo Colegio de San Ildefonso La molendera (1926) Portrait by photographers Edward Weston and Tina Modotti (1940) Drawing of Luz Jiménez (April 1924) by Jean URL
Revised:  Fuente de los Cántaros ("Fountain of the Jugs", by José María Fernández Urbina) in Parque México, Condesa, Mexico City Diego Rivera: La Creación, (1922), San Ildefonso College, then the National Preparatory School"Diego Rivera (1886-1957): La Creación, 1922", Antiguo Colegio de San Ildefonso La molendera (1926) Portrait by photographers Edward Weston and Tina Modotti (1940) Drawing of Luz Jiménez (April 1924) by Jean Charlot
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Original:  9 July Prominent writer and filmmaker Humayun Ahmed dies.
Revised:  19 July Prominent writer and filmmaker Humayun Ahmed dies.
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Original:  21 August 2004 Dhaka grenade attack by terrorist organization Harkat-ul-Jihad-al-Islami (HUJI). 2005 27 January Shah A M S Kibria assassinated in a grenade attack in the Habiganj District, Sylet . 25 February Bangladesh peacekeepers ambushed and killed in the Democratic Republic of the Congo.
Revised:  21 August 2004 Dhaka grenade attack by terrorist organization Harkat-ul-Jihad-al-Islami (HUJI). 2005 27 January Shah A M S Kibria assassinated in a grenade attack in the Habiganj District, Sylhet . 25 February Bangladesh peacekeepers ambushed and killed in the Democratic Republic of the Congo.
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Original: __NOTOC__ This is a timeline of Bangladeshi history, comprising important legal and territorial changes and political events in Bangladesh and its predecessor states.
Revised:  This is a timeline of Bangladeshi history, comprising important legal and territorial changes and political events in Bangladesh and its predecessor states.
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Original:  Yao claimed it was a coded attack on Mao for dismissing in 1959 then-minister of defense Peng Dehuai, a critic of Mao's disastrous Great Leap Forward.
Revised:  Yao claimed it was a coded attack on Mao for dismissing in 1959 then-minister of defense Peng Dehuai, a critic of Mao's Great Leap Forward.
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Original:  Propagandists Category:
Revised:  Chinese propagandists Category:
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Original: Lifespring, founded in 1974, was a private, for-profit, New Age-human potential organization.
Revised: Lifespring, founded in 1974, was a private, for-profit, human potential organization.
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Original:  In her interview with the Post  she stated that after she chose to publicly criticize the organization, she received dozens of phone calls at 3 or 4 AM, was mailed a picture of her 3-year old daughter at daycare, and received a death threat from a former member at a local mall . Spinoffs While Lifespring no longer delivers training, 75 independent companies offer replicas or training employing many of the company's methods, in the United States and in nine other countries, according to Hanley.
Revised:  In her interview with the Post '' she stated that after she chose to publicly criticize the organization, she received dozens of phone calls at 3 or 4 AM, was mailed a picture of her 3-year old daughter at daycare, and received a death threat from a former member at a local mall . Spinoffs While Lifespring no longer delivers training, 75 independent companies offer replicas or training employing many of the company's methods, in the United States and in nine other countries, according to Hanley.
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Original:  In her interview with the Post  she stated that after she chose to publicly criticize the organization, she received dozens of phone calls at 3 or 4 AM, was mailed a picture of her 3-year old daughter at daycare, and received a death threat from a former member at a local mall . Spinoffs While Lifespring no longer delivers training, 75 independent companies offer replicas or training employing many of the company's methods, in the United States and in nine other countries, according to Hanley.
Revised:  In her interview with the Post she stated that after she chose to publicly criticize the organization, she received dozens of phone calls at 3 or 4 AM, was mailed a picture of her 3-year old daughter at daycare, and received a death threat from a former member at a local mall Spinoffs While Lifespring no longer delivers training, 75 independent companies offer replicas or training employing many of the company's methods, in the United States and in nine other countries, according to Hanley.
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Original:  "Choice Center", in Las Vegas, Nevada, bases its methods on the Lifespring model.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Discovery", in Southern California and Texas, offers replicas or training employing many of the company's methods.
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Original:  "Gratitude Trainings", in Charlotte, North Carolina and Florida, bases its methods on the Lifespring model.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "HeartCore Leadership", in San Diego, CA is based on the model of Lifespring.
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Original:  "Leaders in Transformation", also known as LIT, bases its methods on the Lifespring model.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “Next Level Trainings”, in Columbus, Ohio and Philadelphia, Pennsylvnia, bases its methods on the Lifespring model and has mentioned its influence in the trainings.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "WorldWorks", in Southern California, offers replicas or training employing many of the company's methods.
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Original:  In her interview with the Post '' she stated that after she chose to publicly criticize the organization, she received dozens of phone calls at 3 or 4 AM, was mailed a picture of her 3-year old daughter at daycare, and received a death threat from a former member at a local mall             .
Revised:  In her interview with the Post she stated that after she chose to publicly criticize the organization, she received dozens of phone calls at 3 or 4 AM, was mailed a picture of her 3-year old daughter at daycare, and received a death threat from a former member at a local mall .
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Original:  In her interview with the Post '' she stated that after she chose to publicly criticize the organization, she received dozens of phone calls at 3 or 4 AM, was mailed a picture of her 3-year old daughter at daycare, and received a death threat from a former member at a local mall             .
Revised:  In her interview with the Post '' she stated that after she chose to publicly criticize the organization, she received dozens of phone calls at 3 or 4 AM, was mailed a picture of her 3-year old daughter at daycare, and received a death threat from a former member at a local mall . .
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Original:  However, a number of lawsuits were filed against Lifespring (personal communication with trainers), including two cases in which deaths allegedly resulted from trainings.
Revised:  A number of lawsuits were filed against Lifespring (personal communication with trainers), including two cases in which deaths allegedly resulted from trainings.
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Original:  In another case a man who could not swim jumped into a river and drowned.
Revised:  In another case a man who could not swim was made to jump into a river and drowned.
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Original: Lifespring , founded in 1974, was a private, for-profit , human potential organization . Lifespring stated they trained more than 400, 000 people through its ten centers across the United States.
Revised: Lifespring , founded in 1974, was a private, for-profit human potential organization . Lifespring stated they trained more than 400, 000 people through its ten centers across the United States.
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Original: Lifespring , founded in 1974, was a private, for-profit , human potential organization . Lifespring stated they trained more than 400, 000 people through its ten centers across the United States.
Revised: Lifespring , founded in 1974, was a private, for-profit , human potential organization 
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Original:  various academic articles published in psychology journals in the 1970s and 1980s characterized Lifespring's training methods as "deceptive and indirect techniques of persuasion and control", and featured allegations that Lifespring was a cult that coerced members from leaving.
Revised:  various academic articles published in psychology journals in the 1970s and 1980s characterized Lifespring's training methods as "deceptive and indirect techniques of persuasion and control", and allegations that Lifespring was a cult that coerced members from leaving.
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Original:  various academic articles published in psychology journals in the 1970s and 1980s characterized Lifespring's training methods as "deceptive and indirect techniques of persuasion and control", and featured allegations that Lifespring was a cult that coerced members from leaving.
Revised:  various academic articles published in psychology journals in the 1970s and 1980s characterized Lifespring's training methods as "deceptive and indirect techniques of persuasion and control", and featured allegations that Lifespring was a cult that used coercive methods to prevent members from leaving.
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Original:  After these allegations were highlighted in a 1987 article in the Washington Post and local television reporting in communities where Lifespring had a significant presence, Lifespring changed its name to the "Legacy Center."
Revised:  After these allegations were highlighted in a 1987 article in the Washington Post as well as local television reporting in communities where Lifespring had a significant presence, Lifespring changed its name to the "Legacy Center."
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Original:  The Legacy Center was also met with controversy, and when it was under investigation by the North Carolina Attorney General's office for allegedly defrauding its members, it changed its name to the "Gratitude Center."   John Hanley Sr. , Robert White, About Robert White, Living an Extraordinary Life, retrieved 10/20/13 Randy Revell, and Charlene Afremow founded Lifespring in 1974.
Revised:  The Legacy Center was also met with controversy, and when it was under investigation by the North Carolina Attorney General's office for allegedly defrauding its members, it changed its name to the "Gratitude Center." John Hanley Sr. along with Robert White, About Robert White, Living an Extraordinary Life, retrieved 10/20/13 Randy Revell, and Charlene Afremow founded Lifespring in 1974.
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Original:  The Legacy Center was also met with controversy, and when it was under investigation by the North Carolina Attorney General's office for allegedly defrauding its members, it changed its name to the "Gratitude Center."   John Hanley Sr. , Robert White, About Robert White, Living an Extraordinary Life, retrieved 10/20/13 Randy Revell, and Charlene Afremow founded Lifespring in 1974.
Revised:  The Legacy Center was also met with controversy, and when it was under investigation by the North Carolina Attorney General's office for allegedly defrauding its members, it changed its name to the "Gratitude Center." John Hanley Sr. , Robert White, Randy Revell, and Charlene Afremow founded Lifespring in 1974.
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Original: </ref> Prior to Lifespring, Hanley  worked for the company Holiday Magic.
Revised: </ref> Prior to Lifespring, Hanley had worked for the company Holiday Magic.
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Original:  He and the other founders  also worked for Mind Dynamics with Werner Erhard, the founder of est, which became the basis for Landmark Education.
Revised:  He and the other founders had also worked for Mind Dynamics with Werner Erhard, the founder of est, which became the basis for Landmark Education.
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Original:  Ingrasci is now President of the Hoffman InstituteHoffman Institute , Board of Directors, Charles "Raz" Ingrasci, President CEO which offers programs such as the Hoffman Quadrinity Process which some regard as similar to Lifespring.
Revised:  Ingrasci is now President of the Hoffman InstituteHoffman Institute , Board of Directors, Charles "Raz" Ingrasci, President 
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Original:  If any participant did not complete their task the group was considered in "breakdown ".%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The book Evaluating a Large Group Awareness Training made comparisons between Lifespring and est.
Revised:  If any participant did not complete their task the group was considered in "breakdown ".%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:   Indonesian navy ordered missile-firing patrol-boats from the United States, Australia, the Netherlands, South Korea, and Taiwan, as well as submarines from West Germany.
Revised:  The Indonesian navy ordered missile-firing patrol-boats from the United States, Australia, the Netherlands, South Korea, and Taiwan, as well as submarines from West Germany.
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Original:  They resented the repression  of Timorese cultural and political life at the expense of the Indonesian , were ambivalent of Indonesian economic development, and spoke Portuguese amongst themselves, stressing their Portuguese heritage.
Revised:  They resented the repression of Timorese cultural and political life , were ambivalent of Indonesian economic development, and spoke Portuguese amongst themselves, stressing their Portuguese heritage.
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Original:  The new policy came from foreign minister Ali Alatas against the advice of the military leadership who feared it would lead to loss of control .
Revised:  The new policy came from foreign minister Ali Alatas .
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Original:  Alatas and  diplomats swayed Suharto  of the policy as a response to international concerns  .
Revised:  Alatas and other diplomats swayed Suharto of the policy as a response to international concerns .
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Original:  Alatas and  diplomats swayed Suharto  of the policy as a response to international concerns  .
Revised:  Alatas and diplomats swayed Suharto in favor of the policy as a response to international concerns .
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Original:  The end of the Cold War removed much of the justification for western support of Indonesia's occupation.
Revised:  Additionally, the end of the Cold War removed much of the justification for western support of Indonesia's occupation.
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Original:  Until the results of the 13 December election were known  any action required approval from both political parties and the Governor-General.
Revised:  Until the results of the 13 December election were known , any action required approval from both political parties and the Governor-General.
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Original:  On 4 December 1975 Australia unsuccessfully sought a UN resolution to determine the independence of East Timor,  the Australian Government evacuated Australians and other foreign nationals from Dili.
Revised:  On 4 December 1975 Australia unsuccessfully sought a UN resolution to determine the independence of East Timor, and the Australian Government evacuated Australians and other foreign nationals from Dili.
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Original:  In the same news conference  Horta said that East Timor, Fretilin Government would not accept any UN assistance that included Australia.
Revised:  In the same news conference , Horta said that East Timor, Fretilin Government would not accept any UN assistance that included Australia.
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Original:  In the same news conference  Horta said that East Timor, Fretilin Government would not accept any UN assistance that included Australia.
Revised:  In the same news conference Horta said that the Fretilin Government in East Timor would not accept any UN assistance that included Australia.
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Original:  Australia provided important sanctuary to East Timorese independence advocates like José Ramos-Horta ( who based himself in Australia during his exile ) . Australia's trade with Indonesia grew through the 1980s, and the Keating Labor Government signed a security pact with Indonesia in 1995 and gave relations with Jakarta a high priority.
Revised:  Australia provided important sanctuary to East Timorese independence advocates like José Ramos-Horta , who based himself in Australia during his exile ) . Australia's trade with Indonesia grew through the 1980s, and the Keating Labor Government signed a security pact with Indonesia in 1995 and gave relations with Jakarta a high priority.
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Original:  Australia provided important sanctuary to East Timorese independence advocates like José Ramos-Horta ( who based himself in Australia during his exile ) . Australia's trade with Indonesia grew through the 1980s, and the Keating Labor Government signed a security pact with Indonesia in 1995 and gave relations with Jakarta a high priority.
Revised:  Australia provided important sanctuary to East Timorese independence advocates like José Ramos-Horta ( who based himself in Australia during his exile . Australia's trade with Indonesia grew through the 1980s, and the Keating Labor Government signed a security pact with Indonesia in 1995 and gave relations with Jakarta a high priority.
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Original:  The letter upset Indonesian President B. J. Habibie, who saw it as implying Indonesia was a "colonial power  " and he decided to announce a snap referendum.
Revised:  The letter upset Indonesian President B. J. Habibie, who saw it as implying Indonesia was a "colonial power , " and he decided to announce a snap referendum.
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Original:  A UN-sponsored referendum held in 1999 showed overwhelming approval for independence but was followed by violent clashes and a security crisis , instigated by the anti-independence militia.
Revised:  A UN-sponsored referendum held in 1999 showed overwhelming approval for independence but was followed by violent clashes and a security crisis instigated by the anti-independence militia.
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