wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Nissen speaks to businesses and organizations about the benefits of adopting long-term, healthy lifestyle URL She is a women's health advocate and expert on women's wellness, fitness and achieving maximum health.
Revised: Nissen speaks to businesses and organizations about the benefits of adopting long-term, healthy lifestyle habits. She is a women's health advocate and expert on women's wellness, fitness and achieving maximum health.
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Original: Dian Nissen, age 55, bouncing on a competition trampoline (2016) Dian Nissen (born January 1961) is a multiple world-title trampoline athlete and competitor, multiple U.S. Women’s Trampoline champion, United States Tumbling Trampoline Association (U.S.T.A.) AAU All-American, health and fitness URL and entrepreneur.
Revised: Dian Nissen, age 55, bouncing on a competition trampoline (2016) Dian Nissen (born January 1961) is a multiple world-title trampoline athlete and competitor, multiple U.S. Women’s Trampoline champion, Trampoline Association (U.S.T.A.) AAU All-American, health and fitness URL and entrepreneur.
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Original: Dian Nissen, age 55, bouncing on a competition trampoline (2016) Dian Nissen (born January 1961) is a multiple world-title trampoline athlete and competitor, multiple U.S. Women’s Trampoline champion, United States Tumbling Trampoline Association (U.S.T.A.) AAU All-American, health and fitness URL and entrepreneur.
Revised: Dian Nissen, age 55, bouncing on a competition trampoline (2016) Dian Nissen (born January 1961) is a multiple world-title trampoline athlete and competitor, multiple U.S. Women’s Trampoline champion, United States Tumbling AAU All-American, health and fitness URL and entrepreneur.
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Original: Dian Nissen, age 55, bouncing on a competition trampoline (2016) Dian Nissen (born January 1961) is a multiple world-title trampoline athlete and competitor, multiple U.S. Women’s Trampoline champion, AAU All-American, health and fitness URL and entrepreneur.
Revised: Dian Nissen, age 55, bouncing on a competition trampoline (2016) Dian Nissen (born January 1961) is a multiple world-title trampoline athlete and competitor, multiple U.S. Women’s Trampoline champion, AAU All-American, health and fitness expert, and entrepreneur.
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Original:  While the cohesion of LURD always remained bristle , it was widely recognized that unity was necessary if Taylor was to be removed from power.
Revised:  While the cohesion of LURD always remained brittle , it was widely recognized that unity was necessary if Taylor was to be removed from power.
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Original:  The distinction between these two groups is often messy as some Krahn continued to fight with LURD, while some Mandingo's fought with MODEL.
Revised:  The distinction between these two groups is often messy as some Krahn continued to fight with LURD, while some Mandingos fought with MODEL.
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Original:  Page 209. It achieved rapid successes in its war against President Charles Taylor and is believed to have been created by the Côte d'Ivoire government as a way of staking a claim in Liberian politics during the turmoil of that country's civil war, or as retaliation for the Liberian government's alleged support for rebels in the Ivory Coast .
Revised:  Page 209. It achieved rapid successes in its war against President Charles Taylor and is believed to have been created by the Côte d'Ivoire government as a way of staking a claim in Liberian politics during the turmoil of that country's civil war, or as retaliation for the Liberian government's alleged support for rebels in Cote d'Ivoire .
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Original:  Page 209. It achieved rapid successes in its war against President Charles Taylor and is believed to have been created by the Ivory Coast government as a way of staking a claim in Liberian politics during the turmoil of that country's civil war, or as retaliation for the Liberian government's alleged support for rebels in Ivory Coast.
Revised:  Page 209. It achieved rapid successes in its war against President Charles Taylor and is believed to have been created by the Ivorian government as a way of staking a claim in Liberian politics during the turmoil of that country's civil war, or as retaliation for the Liberian government's alleged support for rebels in Ivory Coast.
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Original:  MODEL has been accused of violating UN sanctions by exporting timber from the regions of southern Liberia that it controls.
Revised:  The group may have exported timber from regions of southern Liberia that it controls.
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Original:  Its  leader, Thomas Nimely, was named as Liberia's foreign minister in the transitional government that was appointed on October 14, 2003, following the resignation and exile of Taylor.
Revised:  Its political leader, Thomas Nimely, was named as Liberia's foreign minister in the transitional government that was appointed on October 14, 2003, following the resignation and exile of Taylor.
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Original: The Movement for Democracy in Liberia (MODEL) was a rebel group in Liberia that became active in March 2003, launching attacks from Ivory Coast.
Revised: The Movement 65for Democracy in Liberia (MODEL) was a rebel group in Liberia that became active in March 2003, launching attacks from Ivory Coast.
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Original: The Movement 65for Democracy in Liberia (MODEL) was a rebel group in Liberia that became active in March 2003, launching attacks from Ivory Coast.
Revised: The Movement for Democracy in Liberia (MODEL) was a rebel group in Liberia that became active in March 2003, launching attacks from Ivory Coast.
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Original: JPG|The Zaisan Memorial, created in 2003 The forming of the division was entrusted to Colonel Andrei Getman, the former chief of staff of the 30th Mechanised Corps.
Revised: JPG|The Zaisan Memorial, created in 2003 The division's formation was entrusted to Colonel Andrei Getman, the former chief of staff of the 30th Mechanised Corps.
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Original:  On the morning of November 4 , on the railway between Ryazan and Moscow, the train carrying the division headquarters were bombarded by German planes .
Revised:  On the morning of 4 , on the railway between Ryazan and Moscow, the train carrying the division headquarters were bombarded by German planes .
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Original:  On the morning of November 4 , on the railway between Ryazan and Moscow, the train carrying the division headquarters were bombarded by German planes .
Revised:  On the morning of November 4 , on the railway between Ryazan and Moscow, the train carrying the divisional headquarters was attacked by German aircraft between Ryazan and Moscow .
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Original:  On November 7 , over two dozen trains of the division were unloaded at Podolsk station .
Revised:  On 7 , over two dozen trains of the division were unloaded at Podolsk station .
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Original:  On November 7 , over two dozen trains of the division were unloaded at Podolsk station .
Revised:  On November 7 , over two dozen trains of the division were unloaded at Podolsk .
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Original:  The 112th Division became part of the 6th Tank Corps , 1st Tank Army.
Revised:  The 112th Division became part of the 6th Tank Corps of the 1st Tank Army.
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Original:  Western Front headquarters created a mobile mechanized cavalry group, composed of General Belov's cavalry corps and the 112th Tank Division, the whole commanded General Alexander Belov.
Revised:  Western Front headquarters created a mobile mechanized cavalry group, composed of General Belov's cavalry corps and the 112th Tank Division, under the overall command of General Alexander Belov.
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Original:  The group was created to stop the enemy taking Tula.
Revised:  The group was created to prevent the German capture of Tula.
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Original:  The fighting near Moscow The combat baptism of the division and its commander was November 16 , 1941.
Revised:  The fighting near Moscow The 116th Tank Division saw its first combat on 16 , 1941.
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Original:  The group together with other troops took the offensive in the direction of Maleev – Vyazovka – Vysokinichi, but, against strong resistance,  failed to achieve substantial results.
Revised:  The group together with other troops took the offensive in the direction of Maleev , Vyazovka and Vysokinichi. Amid strong resistance, failed to achieve substantial results.
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Original:  The group together with other troops took the offensive in the direction of Maleev – Vyazovka – Vysokinichi, but, against strong resistance,  failed to achieve substantial results.
Revised:  The group together with other troops took the offensive in the direction of Maleev – Vyazovka – Vysokinichi, but, against strong resistance, however, it failed to achieve substantial results.
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Original:  Within days, the division fought west and north-west of Serpukhov .
Revised:  The division was also involved in combat to the west and north-west of Serpukhov .
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Original:  Within days, the division fought west and north-west of Serpukhov .
Revised:  Within days, the division fought west and north-west of Serpukhov 
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Original:  As a result , General Belov's mobile group released seven localities and thwarted the attack by the German XIII Corps and held Serpukhov . After these battles, Colonel Getman's division was urgently transferred to Kashira, where the hospitals and the front of rear services, to eliminate the German breakthrough.
Revised:  As a result of the action, an attack by the German XIII Corps and held Serpukhov . After these battles, Colonel Getman's division was urgently transferred to Kashira, where the hospitals and the front of rear services, to eliminate the German breakthrough.
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Original:  Until the beginning of the counter-offensive, 112th TD served as a fire brigade, conducting counter-attacks on the flanks of groups of the enemy, supporting 49th and 50th Armies' thin line of defence. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% For its performance in military operations, 112th Tank Division received the Order of the Red Banner.
Revised:  Until the beginning of the counter-offensive, 112th Tank Division served as a fire brigade, conducting counter-attacks on the flanks of groups of the enemy, supporting 49th and 50th Armies' thin line of defence. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% For its performance in military operations, 112th Tank Division received the Order of the Red Banner.
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Original:  On January 2 , 1942 the division was reorganised as the 112th Tank Brigade, maintaining its numbers and numbers of regiments, which became battalions.
Revised:  On 2 , 1942 the division was reorganised as the 112th Tank Brigade, maintaining its numbers and numbers of regiments, which became battalions.
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Original:   1943   The unit received the "Revolutionary Mongolia" title in 1943 when it was re-equipped with 34 T-34/76 and 21 T-70 tanks funded by the Mongolian government of Gonchigiin Bumtsend.
Revised:  Revolutionary Mongolia ( 1943 The unit received the "Revolutionary Mongolia" title in 1943 when it was re-equipped with 34 T-34/76 and 21 T-70 tanks funded by the Mongolian government of Gonchigiin Bumtsend.
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Original:   1943   The unit received the "Revolutionary Mongolia" title in 1943 when it was re-equipped with 34 T-34/76 and 21 T-70 tanks funded by the Mongolian government of Gonchigiin Bumtsend.
Revised:  1943 ) The unit received the "Revolutionary Mongolia" title in 1943 when it was re-equipped with 34 T-34/76 and 21 T-70 tanks funded by the Mongolian government of Gonchigiin Bumtsend.
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Original:   1943   The unit received the "Revolutionary Mongolia" title in 1943 when it was re-equipped with 34 T-34/76 and 21 T-70 tanks funded by the Mongolian government of Gonchigiin Bumtsend.
Revised:  1943 The unit received the "Revolutionary Mongolia" title in 1943 when it was re-equipped with 34 T-34/76 and 21 T-70 tanks , funded the Mongolian People's Republic of Gonchigiin Bumtsend.
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Original:  In addition the Mongolian delegation, headed by Marshal H. Choibalsan, handed over gratis 237 railway wagons with clothes and food: 1,000 tons of meat, 90 tons of oil, 80 tons of sausages, 150 tons of confectionery, 30,000 coats, 30,000 pairs of boots, and 30,000 fur padded jackets.
Revised:  In addition the Mongolian delegation, headed by Marshal H. Choibalsan, handed over gratis 237 railway wagons filled with free clothes and food: 1,000 tons of meat, 90 tons of oil, 80 tons of sausages, 150 tons of confectionery, 30,000 coats, 30,000 pairs of boots, and 30,000 fur padded jackets.
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Original:  On 12 June, 2015 he won gold medal at the European Games 2015, in the final match he defeated Dimitiry Timchenko of Ukraine.
Revised:  On 12 June, 2015 he won gold medal at the European Games 2015, in the final match he defeated Dimitriy Timchenko of Ukraine.
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Original:  born 8 February 1991 in Makhachkala) is a Dargin heritage Dagestani born in Russia Greco-Roman wrestler .
Revised:  born 8 February 1991 in Makhachkala) is a Dagestan-born Russian Greco-Roman wrestler .
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Original:  Two time Junior Greco-Roman World Champion . Gold medalist Russian Ntionals Greco-Roman Wrestling 2015.
Revised:  Two time Junior Greco-Roman World Champion and Gold Medalist at the 2015 Russian National Greco-Roman Wrestling 2015.
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Original:  born 8 February 1991 in Makhachkala) is a Dagestan-born Russian Greco-Roman wrestler of Dargin descent.
Revised:  born 8 February 1991 in Makhachkala) is a Russian Greco-Roman wrestler of Dargin descent.
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Original:  Army and Navy and NDM Some of the first funding into NDM research came from the U.S. Army and Navy in the mid 1980s.
Revised: The present form of RPD has three main variations. In the first variation, the decision maker when faced with the problem at hand, responds with the course of action that was first generated. In the second variation, the decision maker tries to understand the course of events that lead up to the current situation, using mental simulation. In the final variation, the decision maker evalutes each course of action generated and then chooses the most appropriate strategy. Expertise is crucial for using RPD, as it necessary to mentally simulate the course of events that might have lead up to the observed situation and to evalute the course of action generated . Army and Navy and NDM Some of the first funding into NDM research came from the U.S. Army and Navy in the mid 1980s.
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Original: Recognition-Primed Decision (RPD) The recognition-primed decision (RPD) model  describes how people use their experience in the form of patterns.
Revised: Recognition-Primed Decision-Making model (RPD) The recognition-primed decision (RPD) model describes how people use their experience in the form of patterns.
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Original: Recognition-Primed Decision-Making model (RPD) The recognition-primed decision (RPD) model is the main protocol derived from the NDM framework.
Revised: Recognition-primed decision-making model (RPD) The recognition-primed decision (RPD) model is the main protocol derived from the NDM framework.
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Original:  This process exemplifies Herbert Simon ’ s (1957) notion of satisficing – looking for the first workable option rather than trying to find the best possible option.
Revised:  This process exemplifies Herbert Simon ' s (1957) notion of satisficing – looking for the first workable option rather than trying to find the best possible option.
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Original:  Army and Navy and NDM Some of the first funding into NDM research came from the U.S. Army and Navy in the mid-1980s.
Revised:  Army and Navy Some of the first funding into NDM research came from the U.S. Army and Navy in the mid-1980s.
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Original: Origins of the framework Decision researchers had conducted experiments and developed models for decades prior to the emergence of NDM in 1989.
Revised: The NDM framework and its origins Decision researchers had conducted experiments and developed models for decades prior to the emergence of NDM in 1989.
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Original:  The framework The NDM framework focuses on cognitive functions such as decision making, sensemaking, situational awareness,  planning – which emerge in natural settings and take forms that are not easily replicated in the laboratory.
Revised:  The NDM framework focuses on cognitive functions such as decision making, sensemaking, situational awareness, planning – which emerge in natural settings and take forms that are not easily replicated in the laboratory.
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Original:  The framework The NDM framework focuses on cognitive functions such as decision making, sensemaking, situational awareness,  planning – which emerge in natural settings and take forms that are not easily replicated in the laboratory.
Revised:  The framework The NDM framework focuses on cognitive functions such as decision making, sensemaking, situational awareness, and planning – which emerge in natural settings and take forms that are not easily replicated in the laboratory.
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Original:  For example, it is difficult to replicate high stakes , or provide for problem detection , or to achieve extremely high levels of expertise, or to realistically incorporate team and organizational constraints.
Revised:  For example, it is difficult to replicate high stakes , or to achieve extremely high levels of expertise, or to realistically incorporate team and organizational constraints.
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Original:  The NDM framework and its origins Decision researchers had conducted experiments and developed models for decades prior to the emergence of NDM in 1989.
Revised:  Decision researchers had conducted experiments and developed models for decades prior to the emergence of NDM in 1989.
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Original: 20th-century Indian scientists Category:Indian women surgeons Category:Indian surgeons Category:University College Trivandrum alumni Category:University of Madras alumni Category:Medical doctors from Kerala Category:19th-century Indian medical doctors Category:20th-century Indian medical doctors Category:19th-century Indian women scientists Category:19th-century Indian scientists Category:Women scientists from Kerala Category:20th-century women  physicia
Revised: 20th-century Indian scientists Category:Indian women surgeons Category:Indian surgeons Category:University College Trivandrum alumni Category:University of Madras alumni Category:Medical doctors from Kerala Category:19th-century Indian medical doctors Category:20th-century Indian medical doctors Category:19th-century Indian women scientists Category:19th-century Indian scientists Category:Women scientists from Kerala Category:20th-century women physicians Category:19th-century women physicia
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Original:  She completed her schooling at Holy Angel ’ s Convent High School, Thiruvananthapuram and topped the matriculation examination.
Revised:  She completed her schooling at Holy Angel ' s Convent High School, Thiruvananthapuram and topped the matriculation examination.
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Original: Biography Mary Lukose, née Mary Poonen, was born to a rich Anglican Syrian Christian family as the only child on 2 August 1886 in Aymanam—a small village later made famous by being the setting of the novel The God of Small Things— in the princely state of Travancore (modern day Kerala), in the British Indian Empire.
Revised: Biography Mary Lukose, née Mary Poonen, was born to a rich Syrian Christian family as the only child on 2 August 1886 in Aymanam—a small village later made famous by being the setting of the novel The God of Small Things— in the princely state of Travancore (modern day Kerala), in the British Indian Empire.
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Original: Smart Sheriff  is a controversial South Korean parental monitoring mobile app, introduced in 2015.
Revised: Smart Sheriff () is a controversial South Korean parental monitoring mobile app, introduced in 2015.
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Original: Smart Sheriff () is a controversial South Korean parental monitoring mobile app, introduced in 2015.
Revised: Smart Sheriff () is a South Korean parental monitoring mobile app, introduced in 2015.
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Original:  It also monitors the user's location, usage time, what apps they use (giving the parents remote ability to uninstall them or power down the phone) and what sites they visit.
Revised:  It also monitors the user's location, usage time, what apps they use (giving the parents remote ability to uninstall them or power down the phone) and what websites they visit.
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Original:  As of June 2015 the app has been downloaded about 500,000 times.
Revised:  By June 2015 the app has been downloaded about 500,000 times.
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Original:  As of June 2015 the app has been downloaded about 500,000 times.
Revised:  As of June 2015 the app had been downloaded about 500,000 times.
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Original:  The Korean government requires its installation on the smart phones of all users who are under 19 years old, and the app allows the children's parents or guardians , or indeed, complete strangers to monitor their online activity and block access to various websites.
Revised:  The Korean government requires its installation on the smart phones of all users who are under 19 years old, and the app allows the children's parents or guardians to monitor their online activity and block access to various websites.
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Original:  The Korean government requires its installation on the smart phones of all users who are under 19 years old, and the app allows the children's parents or guardians to monitor their online activity and block access to various websites.
Revised:  The Korean government required its installation on the smart phones of all users who are under 19 years old, and the app allows the children's parents or guardians to monitor their online activity and block access to various websites.
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Original:  The regulation, passed by the Korea Communications Commission, requires compliance from both telecom companies and the public.
Revised:  The regulation, passed by the Korea Communications Commission, required compliance from both telecom companies and the public.
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Original:  There is no opt-out provision, the telecom operators have to ensure its installation on all new phones sold to those under 19 years of age and failure to install the app will render the phone unable to operate.
Revised:  There was no opt-out provision, the telecom operators have to ensure its installation on all new phones sold to those under 19 years of age and failure to install the app will render the phone unable to operate.
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Original:  There is no opt-out provision, the telecom operators have to ensure its installation on all new phones sold to those under 19 years of age and failure to install the app will render the phone unable to operate.
Revised:  There is no opt-out provision, the telecom operators have to ensure its installation on all new phones sold to those under 19 years of age and failure to install the app rendered the phone unable to operate.
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Original:  While the government maintains the app is intended to protect minors from harmful content, the app has been criticized for its invasion of privacy.
Revised:  While the government maintained the app is intended to protect minors from harmful content, the app has been criticized for its invasion of privacy.
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Original:  It is the first parental control app that has been made a legally required, obligatory install in any country   .
Revised:  It is the first parental control app that has been made a legally required, obligatory install in any country . .
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