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Original:  On August 13, 2008, President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo personally handpicked Dr. Rey Aquino to be the President and CEO of the Philippine Health Insurance Corporation or PhilHealth , a tax-exempt, government owned and controlled corporation (GOCC) of the Philippines, and is attached to the Department of Health.
Revised:  On August 13, 2008, President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo personally handpicked Dr. Rey Aquino to be the President and CEO of the Philippine Health Insurance Corporation (PhilHealth) , a tax-exempt, government owned and controlled corporation (GOCC) of the Philippines, and is attached to the Department of Health.
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Original:  On August 13, 2008, President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo personally handpicked Dr. Rey Aquino to be the President and CEO of the Philippine Health Insurance Corporation or PhilHealth , a tax-exempt, government owned and controlled corporation (GOCC) of the Philippines, and is attached to the Department of Health.
Revised:  On August 13, 2008, President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo personally handpicked Dr. Rey Aquino to be the President and CEO of the Philippine Health Insurance Corporation or PhilHealth , a tax-exempt, government owned and controlled corporation (GOCC) of the Philippines, which is attached to the Department of Health.
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Original:  Notable achievements - During his term as the Mayor of San Fernando, Dr. Rey Aquino has managed to successfully lobby for the cityhood of the then San Fernando town.
Revised:  Trivia - During his term as the Mayor of San Fernando, Dr. Rey Aquino has managed to successfully lobby for the cityhood of the then San Fernando town.
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Original:  Notable achievements - During his term as the Mayor of San Fernando, Dr. Rey Aquino has managed to successfully lobby for the cityhood of the then San Fernando town.
Revised:  Notable achievements During his term as the Mayor of San Fernando, Dr. Rey Aquino has managed to successfully lobby for the cityhood of the then San Fernando town.
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Original:  Notable achievements - During his term as the Mayor of San Fernando, Dr. Rey Aquino has managed to successfully lobby for the cityhood of the then San Fernando town.
Revised:  Notable achievements - During his term as the mayor of San Fernando, Dr. Rey Aquino has managed to successfully lobby for the cityhood of the then San Fernando town.
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Original:  Notable achievements - During his term as the Mayor of San Fernando, Dr. Rey Aquino has managed to successfully lobby for the cityhood of the then San Fernando town.
Revised:  Notable achievements - During his term as the Mayor of San Fernando, Aquino lobbied for the cityhood of the then San Fernando town.
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Original:  Dr. Aquino saved San Fernando from further damage caused by the eruption of Mt. Pinatubo and the subsequent lahar and flooding that followed by leading the Save San Fernando Foundation Incorporated (SSFI) which paved way for the construction of Megadike. - Dr. Rey Aquino increased the flow of investments and employment in the City of San Fernando by allowing S.M. (Shoemart) to build a mall that will benefit Fernandinos in the long run.
Revised:  Dr. Aquino saved San Fernando from further damage caused by the eruption of Mt. Pinatubo and the subsequent lahar and flooding that followed by leading the Save San Fernando Foundation Incorporated (SSFI) which paved way for the construction of Megadike. Aquino increased the flow of investments and employment in the City of San Fernando by allowing S.M. (Shoemart) to build a mall that will benefit Fernandinos in the long run.
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Original:  Dr. Rey Aquino holds the distinction of being the last municipal Mayor of San Fernando, and the first Mayor in its conversion of becoming a city. -
Revised:  Dr. Rey Aquino holds the distinction of being the last municipal Mayor of San Fernando, and the first mayor in its conversion of becoming a city. -
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Original:  Dr. Rey Aquino holds the distinction of being the last municipal Mayor of San Fernando, and the first Mayor in its conversion of becoming a city. -
Revised:  Dr. Rey Aquino holds the distinction of being the last municipal Mayor of San Fernando, and the first Mayor in its conversion of becoming a city. 
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Original:  While he was vice-mayor, Dr. Aquino sought to make the Sangguniang Bayan (an assembly that passes ordinances and resolutions to the municipality) sessions more accessible and nearer to the masses by holding them in the barangay halls where more people can come and voice their opinions. - When he was in Congress, Dr. Rey Aquino carried over the Project REY or Reading Excellence for the Youth from his last term as Mayor .
Revised:  While he was vice-mayor, Aquino sought to make the Sangguniang Bayan (an assembly that passes ordinances and resolutions to the municipality) sessions more accessible and nearer to the masses by holding them in the barangay halls where more people can come and voice their opinions. - When he was in Congress, Dr. Rey Aquino carried over the Project REY or Reading Excellence for the Youth from his last term as Mayor .
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Original:  While he was vice-mayor, Dr. Aquino sought to make the Sangguniang Bayan (an assembly that passes ordinances and resolutions to the municipality) sessions more accessible and nearer to the masses by holding them in the barangay halls where more people can come and voice their opinions. - When he was in Congress, Dr. Rey Aquino carried over the Project REY or Reading Excellence for the Youth from his last term as Mayor .
Revised:  While he was vice-mayor, Dr. Aquino sought to make the Sangguniang Bayan (an assembly that passes ordinances and resolutions to the municipality) sessions more accessible and nearer to the masses by holding them in the barangay halls where more people can come and voice their opinions. When he was in Congress, Dr. Rey Aquino carried over the Project REY or Reading Excellence for the Youth from his last term as Mayor .
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Original:  While he was vice-mayor, Dr. Aquino sought to make the Sangguniang Bayan (an assembly that passes ordinances and resolutions to the municipality) sessions more accessible and nearer to the masses by holding them in the barangay halls where more people can come and voice their opinions. - When he was in Congress, Dr. Rey Aquino carried over the Project REY or Reading Excellence for the Youth from his last term as Mayor .
Revised:  While he was vice-mayor, Dr. Aquino sought to make the Sangguniang Bayan (an assembly that passes ordinances and resolutions to the municipality) sessions more accessible and nearer to the masses by holding them in the barangay halls where more people can come and voice their opinions. - When he was in Congress, Aquino carried over the Project REY or Reading Excellence for the Youth from his last term as Mayor .
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Original:  While he was vice-mayor, Dr. Aquino sought to make the Sangguniang Bayan (an assembly that passes ordinances and resolutions to the municipality) sessions more accessible and nearer to the masses by holding them in the barangay halls where more people can come and voice their opinions. - When he was in Congress, Dr. Rey Aquino carried over the Project REY or Reading Excellence for the Youth from his last term as Mayor .
Revised:  While he was vice-mayor, Dr. Aquino sought to make the Sangguniang Bayan (an assembly that passes ordinances and resolutions to the municipality) sessions more accessible and nearer to the masses by holding them in the barangay halls where more people can come and voice their opinions. - When he was in Congress, Dr. Rey Aquino carried over the Project REY or Reading Excellence for the Youth from his last term as mayor .
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Original:  The program aimed at increasing the reading comprehension of young students, and to instill in them a love for reading and studying. - Dr. Aquino significantly grew the benefits of members of PhilHealth by up to 35 percent while he was CEO and President , the highest so far in the history of PhilHealth .
Revised:  The program aimed at increasing the reading comprehension of young students, and to instill in them a love for reading and studying. Aquino significantly grew the benefits of members of PhilHealth by up to 35 percent while he was CEO and President , the highest so far in the history of PhilHealth .
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Original:  The program aimed at increasing the reading comprehension of young students, and to instill in them a love for reading and studying. - Dr. Aquino significantly grew the benefits of members of PhilHealth by up to 35 percent while he was CEO and President , the highest so far in the history of PhilHealth .
Revised:  The program aimed at increasing the reading comprehension of young students, and to instill in them a love for reading and studying. - Dr. Aquino significantly grew the benefits of members of PhilHealth by up to 35 percent while he was CEO and president , the highest so far in the history of PhilHealth .
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Original:  The program aimed at increasing the reading comprehension of young students, and to instill in them a love for reading and studying. - Dr. Aquino significantly grew the benefits of members of PhilHealth by up to 35 percent while he was CEO and President , the highest so far in the history of PhilHealth .
Revised:  The program aimed at increasing the reading comprehension of young students, and to instill in them a love for reading and studying. - Dr. Aquino significantly grew the benefits of members of PhilHealth by up to 35 percent while he was CEO and President , the highest so far .
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Original: Aquino was mayor of San Fernando on three different occasions, but his first bid in 1995 for the mayoralty that proved to be the most difficult.
Revised: Aquino was mayor of San Fernando on three occasions, but his first bid in 1995 for the mayoralty that proved to be the most difficult.
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Original: Frontier warfare during the American Revolution was particularly brutal, and numerous atrocities were committed by settlers and native tribes alike .
Revised: Frontier warfare during the American Revolution was particularly brutal, and numerous atrocities were committed by settlers .
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Original:  The father does not have a significant role in the upbringing of his own children;
Revised:  The father didn't have to interfere in the upbringing of his own children;
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Original: Description Frequently, visiting marriage is being practiced, meaning that husband and wife are living apart  in their separate families, seeing each other in their spare time.
Revised: Description Frequently, visiting marriage is being practiced, meaning that husband and wife are living apart , in their separate families, seeing each other in their spare time.
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Original: Description Frequently, visiting marriage is being practiced, meaning that husband and wife are living apart  in their separate families, seeing each other in their spare time.
Revised: Description Frequently, visiting marriage is being practiced, meaning that husband and wife are living apart in their separate birth families, and seeing each other in their spare time.
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Original:  The father didn 't have to interfere in the upbringing of his own children;
Revised:  The father doesn 't have to interfere in the upbringing of his own children;
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Original:  The father didn 't have to interfere in the upbringing of his own children;
Revised:  The father didn 't have to be involved in the upbringing of his own children;
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Original:  In sociobiology, matrilocality refers to animal societies in which a pair bond is formed between animals born or hatched in different areas or different social groups, and the pair becomes resident in the female's home area or group   .
Revised:  In sociobiology, matrilocality refers to animal societies in which a pair bond is formed between animals born or hatched in different areas or different social groups, and the pair becomes resident in the female's home area or group . .
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Original: Description Frequently, visiting marriage is being practiced, meaning that husband and wife are living apart, in their separate birth families, and seeing each other in their spare  time.
Revised: Description Frequently, visiting marriage is being practiced, meaning that husband and wife are living apart, in their separate birth families, and seeing each other in their spare gamers love time.
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Original:  The father doesn't have to be involved in the upbringing of his own children;
Revised:  The father does not have to be involved in the upbringing of his own children;
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Original: The Whole Word - The Turner Prize = A Better World by Rachel Jordan.
Revised: The Whole Word – The Turner Prize = A Better World by Rachel Jordan.
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Original:  Jordan has painted work satirising the Tate gallery and the Turner Prize, including one painting based on Martin Creed's illuminated lettering The Whole World - The Work = The Whole World, which at one time was displayed on the portico of Tate Britain (it is now in Tate Modern).
Revised:  Jordan has painted work satirising the Tate gallery and the Turner Prize, including one painting based on Martin Creed's illuminated lettering The Whole World – The Work = The Whole World, which at one time was displayed on the portico of Tate Britain (it is now in Tate Modern).
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Original:  Jordan's painting shows the installation at Tate Britain, but with substituted words and is called The Whole World - The Turner Prize = A Better World.
Revised:  Jordan's painting shows the installation at Tate Britain, but with substituted words and is called The Whole World – The Turner Prize = A Better World.
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Original: Campbell, Aidan "Interview - Rachel Jordan", culturewars.com, January 2004.
Revised: Campbell, Aidan "Interview – Rachel Jordan", culturewars.com, January 2004.
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Original: "This cellular life - Rachel Jordan", BBC online, 5 October 2005.
Revised: "This cellular life – Rachel Jordan", BBC online, 5 October 2005.
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Original:   Adó & Mussetta, 2020;
Revised:  Lamela Adó & Mussetta, 2020;
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Original:  Mussetta , 2017c;
Revised:  Mussetta 2017c;
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Original:  Category: 1989 births Category:Indonesian television actresses Category:Indonesian female singers Category:Indonesian rhythm and blues singers Category:Indonesian pop singers Category:Living people Category:Minangkabau people Category:Actresses from Jakarta Category:21st-century women singe
Revised:  Category: 1969 births Category:Indonesian television actresses Category:Indonesian female singers Category:Indonesian rhythm and blues singers Category:Indonesian pop singers Category:Living people Category:Minangkabau people Category:Actresses from Jakarta Category:21st-century women singe
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Original: Dr. Juanda Jaya is a citizen of Malaysia of Melanau decent .
Revised: Dr. Juanda Jaya is a Malaysian politician. He is of Melanau descent .
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Original:  Dr. Juanda Jaya is a Malaysian politician.
Revised: Yang Berhormat Dato' Murshid Diraja Dr. Juanda Jaya is a Malaysian politician.
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Original: In the 2016 Sarawak state election, he was chosen as the Barisan Nasional candidate for the N44 Jemoreng constituency, as the incumbent  Abu Seman Jahwie wished not to be nominated due to health reason.
Revised: In the 2016 Sarawak state election, he was chosen as the Barisan Nasional candidate for the N44 Jemoreng constituency, as the incumbent Abu Seman Jahwie wished not to be re-nominated due to health reason.
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Original:  or the Tunbridge Miscellany, 1712–40), local productions (The Yorkshire Garland, 1788),Google Books The Yorkshire Garland and courtly, coterie or collegiate collections (Thomas Warton’s The Oxford Sausage: or select poetical pieces written by the most celebrated wits of the University of Oxford, 1764-80 ).
Revised:  or the Tunbridge Miscellany, 1712–40), local productions (The Yorkshire Garland, 1788),Google Books The Yorkshire Garland and courtly, coterie or collegiate collections (Thomas Warton’s The Oxford Sausage: or select poetical pieces written by the most celebrated wits of the University of Oxford, 1764–80 ).
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Original: 7|alt=Frontispiece and title page to eighteenth-century miscellany|Frontispiece and title page to The Merry Thought: or, The Glass-Window and Bog-house Miscellany,The Merry Thought: or, The Glass-Window and Bog-house Miscellany which claimed to include "the Lucubrations of the Polite Part of the World, written upon walls, in Bog-Houses" such as the one at left of the tavern shown . ]]
Revised: 7|alt=Frontispiece and title page to eighteenth-century miscellany|Frontispiece and title page to The Merry Thought: or, The Glass-Window and Bog-house Miscellany,The Merry Thought: or, The Glass-Window and Bog-house Miscellany which claimed to include "the Lucubrations of the Polite Part of the World, written upon walls, in Bog-Houses" such as the one at left of the tavern shown ]]
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Original:  341-429. Due to the sheer number and variety of miscellanies printed in the 18th century, there are few generalizations that can be made about them.
Revised:  341–429. Due to the sheer number and variety of miscellanies printed in the 18th century, there are few generalizations that can be made about them.
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Original:  as educative moral guides (Miscellanies, Moral and Instructive, in Prose and Verse, 1787),Google Books Miscellanies, Moral and Instructive, in Prose and Verse as repositories of useful information (A Miscellany of Ingenious Thoughts and Reflections in Verse and Prose, 1721–30), as elocutionary aids (William Enfield’s The Speaker, 1774-1820 ),Google Books The Speaker and as guides for poetical composition (Edward Bysshe's The Art of English Poetry, 1702–62).
Revised:  as educative moral guides (Miscellanies, Moral and Instructive, in Prose and Verse, 1787),Google Books Miscellanies, Moral and Instructive, in Prose and Verse as repositories of useful information (A Miscellany of Ingenious Thoughts and Reflections in Verse and Prose, 1721–30), as elocutionary aids (William Enfield’s The Speaker, 1774–1820 ),Google Books The Speaker and as guides for poetical composition (Edward Bysshe's The Art of English Poetry, 1702–62).
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Original:       Expansion into new environments A potential for virulence exists whenever a pathogen invades a new environment, host or tissue.
Revised:  Coincidental evolution hypothesis Some forms of pathogenic virulence did not co-evolve with the host. For example, tetanus is caused by the soil bacterium Clostridium tetani. After C. tetani bacteria enter a human wound, the bacteria may grow and divide rapidly, even though the human body is not their normal habitat. While dividing, C. tetani produce a neurotoxin that is lethal to humans. But it is selection in the bacterium's normal life cycle in the soil that leads it to produce this toxin, not any evolution with a human host. The bacterium finds itself inside a human instead of in the soil by mere happenstance. We can say that the neurotoxin is not directed at the human host. Expansion into new environments A potential for virulence exists whenever a pathogen invades a new environment, host or tissue.
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Original:  The parasite's fitness is determined by its success in transmitting offsprings to other hosts.
Revised:  The parasite's fitness is determined by its success in transmitting offspring to other hosts.
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Original:  For this reason virulence thrives in a community with prevalent immune dysfunction and poor nutrition.
Revised:  The optimum conditions for high virulence would be a community with prevalent immune dysfunction and poor nutrition.
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Original:  For this reason virulence thrives in a community with prevalent immune dysfunction and poor nutrition.
Revised:  For this reason virulence thrives in a community with immune dysfunction (and/or poor hygiene and poor nutrition.
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Original:  Ewald is convinced that the crowding of  trench warfare provided an easy route to transmission that explains the virulence of the 1918 influenza pandemic.
Revised:  Ewald is convinced that the crowding of trench warfare provided an easy route to transmission that evolved the virulence of the 1918 influenza pandemic.
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Original:  In crowded conditions the time to find a new host is minimal .
Revised:  In such immobilized, crowded conditions pathogens can make individuals very sick and still jump to healthy individuals .
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Original:  For example, Mackinnon and Read (2004) and Paul et al. (2004) studied the malaria parasite using a rodent and chicken model respectively and found that there was trade-off between transmission success and virulence as defined by host mortality.
Revised:  For example, studies of the malaria parasite using a rodent and chicken model respectively and found that there was trade-off between transmission success and virulence as defined by host mortality.
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Original:  For example, Mackinnon and Read (2004) and Paul et al. (2004) studied the malaria parasite using a rodent and chicken model respectively and found that there was trade-off between transmission success and virulence as defined by host mortality.
Revised:  For example, Mackinnon and Read (2004) and Paul et al. (2004) studied the malaria parasite using rodent and chicken model respectively and found that there was trade-off between transmission success and virulence as defined by host mortality.
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Original:  For example, Mackinnon and Read (2004) and Paul et al. (2004) studied the malaria parasite using a rodent and chicken model respectively and found that there was trade-off between transmission success and virulence as defined by host mortality.
Revised:  For example, Mackinnon and Read (2004) and Paul et al. (2004) studied the malaria parasite using a rodent and chicken models found that there was trade-off between transmission success and virulence as defined by host mortality.
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Original: Raid On 16 March 1594  Langton sighted the port of Puerto Caballos and entered it's bay seeing a number  ships in the harbour.
Revised: Raid On 16 March 1594 , Langton sighted the port of Puerto Caballos and entered it's bay seeing a number ships in the harbour.
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Original: Raid On 16 March 1594  Langton sighted the port of Puerto Caballos and entered it's bay seeing a number  ships in the harbour.
Revised: Raid On 16 March 1594 Langton sighted the port of Puerto Caballos and entered its bay, seeing a number ships in the harbour.
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Original: Raid On 16 March 1594  Langton sighted the port of Puerto Caballos and entered it's bay seeing a number  ships in the harbour.
Revised: Raid On 16 March 1594 Langton sighted the port of Puerto Caballos and entered it's bay seeing a number of ships in the harbour.
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Original:  With his ﬂagship Anthony flying false colors  Langton seized the harbor pilot boat and then demanded the surrender of the seven large ships awaiting cargo inside under Diego Ramírez.
Revised:  With his ﬂagship Anthony flying false colors , Langton seized the harbor pilot boat and then demanded the surrender of the seven large ships awaiting cargo inside under Diego Ramírez.
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Original:  The demand was immediately refused but it did not stop Langton and so the next morning he engaged in a day long gunnery duel with the Spanish  causing damage to both the town and ships.
Revised:  The demand was immediately refused but it did not stop Langton and so the next morning he engaged in a day-long gunnery duel with the Spanish causing damage to both the town and ships.
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