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Original: BOM also warn coastal residents between Cairns and Townsville of the dangerous storm tide when the cyclone crosses the coast.
Revised: The BOM also warns coastal residents between Cairns and Townsville of the dangerous storm tide when the cyclone crosses the coast.
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Original: BOM also warn coastal residents between Cairns and Townsville of the dangerous storm tide when the cyclone crosses the coast.
Revised: BOM also warn coastal residents between Cairns and Townsville of dangerous storm tide when the cyclone crosses the coast.
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Original:  The bureau say the sea is likely to steadily rise up to a level which will be significantly above the normal tide, with damaging waves, strong currents and flooding of low-lying areas extending some way inland.
Revised:  The bureau says the sea is likely to steadily rise up to a level which will be significantly above the normal tide, with damaging waves, strong currents and flooding of low-lying areas extending some way inland.
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Original: Tropical Cyclone Larry, currently building off far north Queensland  is expected to intensify before crossing the coast.
Revised: Tropical Cyclone Larry, currently building off far north Queensland , is expected to intensify before crossing the coast.
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Original:  CBS reports that , by a similarly wide margin (54\% to 32\%), more people disapprove than approve of the way Congress is handling its job.
Revised:  The poll also found that more people disapprove than approve of the way Congress is handling its job.
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Original:  Foreign-policy approval ratings vary by party affiliation (Republicans 64\% , Democrats 6\% and Independents 24\% ).
Revised:  Foreign-policy approval ratings vary by party affiliation , with 64\% , Democrats 6\% and Independents 24\% ).
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Original:  The poll indicates that nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe President Bush says things are better in Iraq than they actually are, up  from 58\% in January, and less than one-fourth (23\%) believe that President Bush describes things accurately.
Revised:  The poll indicates that nearly two-thirds of Americans believe President Bush says things are better in Iraq than they actually are, up from 58\% in January, and less than one-fourth (23\%) believe that President Bush describes things accurately.
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Original:  The poll indicates that nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe President Bush says things are better in Iraq than they actually are, up  from 58\% in January, and less than one-fourth (23\%) believe that President Bush describes things accurately.
Revised:  The poll indicates that nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe President Bush says things are better in Iraq than they actually are, up to 66\% from 58\% in January, and less than one-fourth (23\%) believe that President Bush describes things accurately.
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Original:  The poll indicates that nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe President Bush says things are better in Iraq than they actually are, up  from 58\% in January, and less than one-fourth (23\%) believe that President Bush describes things accurately.
Revised:  The poll indicates that nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe President Bush says things are better in Iraq than they actually are, up from 58\% in January, and less than one-fourth believe that President Bush describes things accurately.
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Original:  By a slight edge ( 47\% to 45\% ), more people disapprove than approve of the President's efforts against terrorism.
Revised:  By a slight edge , 47\% to 45\% ), more people disapprove than approve of the President's efforts against terrorism.
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Original:  By a slight edge ( 47\% to 45\% ), more people disapprove than approve of the President's efforts against terrorism.
Revised:  By a slight edge ( 47\% to 45\% , the poll results indicated more people disapprove than approve of the President's efforts against terrorism.
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Original:  The Democratic Party is seen as more likely to make the right decisions regarding Iraq by a slight majority of respondents (41\%).
Revised:  41\% of Americans see the Democratic Party as more likely to make the right decisions regarding Iraq by a slight majority of respondents (41\%).
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Original:  In contrast, more people approved than disapproved of these efforts ( 52\% vs 43\% ) back in January . Based on the latest CBS poll, nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe the country is on the wrong track, as opposed to a little over one-fourth (28\%) who believe the United States is on the right track.
Revised:  In contrast, more people approved than disapproved of these efforts ( 52\% approved and 43\% ) back in January . Based on the latest CBS poll, nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe the country is on the wrong track, as opposed to a little over one-fourth (28\%) who believe the United States is on the right track.
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Original:  In contrast, more people approved than disapproved of these efforts ( 52\% vs 43\% ) back in January . Based on the latest CBS poll, nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe the country is on the wrong track, as opposed to a little over one-fourth (28\%) who believe the United States is on the right track.
Revised:  In contrast, more people approved than disapproved of these efforts ( 52\% vs 43\% ) back in January . Based on the latest CBS poll, nearly two thirds of Americans believe the country is on the wrong track, as opposed to a little over one-fourth (28\%) who believe the United States is on the right track.
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Original:  In contrast, more people approved than disapproved of these efforts ( 52\% vs 43\% ) back in January . Based on the latest CBS poll, nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe the country is on the wrong track, as opposed to a little over one-fourth (28\%) who believe the United States is on the right track.
Revised:  In contrast, more people approved than disapproved of these efforts ( 52\% vs 43\% ) back in January . Based on the latest CBS poll, nearly two-thirds (66\%) of Americans believe the country is on the wrong track, as opposed to a little over a quarter who believe the United States is on the right track.
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Original:  50\% of polled Americans do not believe the U.S. government is providing U.S. troops in Iraq enough resources to succeed, compared to 37\% who do.
Revised: According to the poll, 50\% of polled Americans do not believe the U.S. government is providing U.S. troops in Iraq enough resources to succeed, compared to 37\% who do.
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Original:  50\% of polled Americans do not believe the U.S. government is providing U.S. troops in Iraq enough resources to succeed, compared to 37\% who do.
Revised:  50\% of Americans do not believe the U.S. government is providing U.S. troops in Iraq enough resources to succeed, compared to 37\% who do.
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Original:  However, 76\% of those polled oppose reinstating the draft to provide additional soldiers for Iraq.
Revised:  However, 76\% oppose reinstating the draft to provide additional soldiers for Iraq.
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Original:  According to the CBS report, 59\% of polled Americans believe that the troop numbers should be decreased or that they should be removed entirely.
Revised:  According to the CBS report, 59\% of Americans believe that the troop numbers should be decreased or that they should be removed entirely.
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Original:  However, 63\% of those polled believe the troops will remain in Iraq for two or more years.
Revised:  However, 63\% believe the troops will remain in Iraq for two or more years.
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Original:  By a small margin ( 44\% to 42\%), people polled believe that if the troops were withdrawn, violence in Iraq would increase as opposed to not change.
Revised:  The poll found that 44\% to 42\%), people polled believe that if the troops were withdrawn, violence in Iraq would increase as opposed to not change.
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Original:  By a small margin ( 44\% to 42\%), people polled believe that if the troops were withdrawn, violence in Iraq would increase as opposed to not change.
Revised:  By a small margin ( 44\% of people believe that if the troops were withdrawn, violence in Iraq would increase as opposed to not change.
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Original:  By a small margin ( 44\% to 42\%), people polled believe that if the troops were withdrawn, violence in Iraq would increase as opposed to not change.
Revised:  By a small margin ( 44\% to 42\%), people polled believe that if the troops were withdrawn, violence in Iraq would increase , while 42\% thought the violence would not change.
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Original:  Only 11\% of those polled felt it would lead to less violence.
Revised:  Only 11\% of people felt it would lead to less violence.
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Original:   60\% of Americans say the war has taken longer than expected, while only 4\% say shorter.
Revised:  CBS report that 60\% of Americans say the war has taken longer than expected, while only 4\% say shorter.
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Original:  Slightly more people say the war in Iraq is separate from the war on terrorism than say it is a major or a minor part of the war on terrorism (49\% to 46\%) .
Revised:  In this poll, slightly more people say the war in Iraq is separate from the war on terrorism than say it is a major or a minor part of the war on terrorism (49\% to 46\%) .
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Original:  Slightly more people say the war in Iraq is separate from the war on terrorism than say it is a major or a minor part of the war on terrorism (49\% to 46\%) .
Revised:  Slightly more people say the war in Iraq is separate from the war on terrorism than say it is a major or a minor part of the war on terrorism .
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Original:  This most recent poll found that 15\% answered that success is very likely, while 36\% thought success is somewhat likely.
Revised:  The latest poll found that 15\% answered that success is very likely, while 36\% thought success is somewhat likely.
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Original: __NOTOC__ A new CBS News poll reports that Americans are increasingly negative about the war in Iraq , and that President Bush's job approval ratings, now down to 34\%, continued to decline.
Revised: __NOTOC__ A new CBS News poll reports that Americans are increasingly negative about the , and that President Bush's job approval ratings, now down to 34\%, continued to decline.
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Original:  The maximum margin of statistical sampling error for results based on the full sample is plus or minus three percentage points.
Revised:  The maximum for results based on the full sample is plus or minus three percentage points.
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Original:  A more narrow majority of 51\% thought removing Saddam Hussein was not worth going to war.
Revised:  A more narrow majority of 51\% thought removing was not worth going to war.
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Original:  When asked why President Bush went to war, 21\% said it was to protect the United States, 19\% said to protect U.S. oil interests and 11\% say to complete the Iraq war effort started by his father . Related new 
Revised:  When asked why President Bush went to war, 21\% said it was to protect the United States, 19\% said to protect U.S. oil interests and 11\% say to complete the Iraq war effort started by his . Related new 
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Original:  When asked why President Bush went to war, 21\% said it was to protect the United States, 19\% said to protect U.S. oil interests and 11\% say to complete the Iraq war effort started by his father . Related new 
Revised:  When asked why President Bush went to war, 21\% said it was to protect the United States, 19\% said to protect U.S. oil interests and 11\% say to complete the Iraq war effort started by his father . Related news 
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Original: For months, a group of farmers camped outside the local headquarters of the Communist  in Sanchawan village, in China's Shaanxi province.
Revised: For months, a group of farmers camped outside the local headquarters of the Communist Party in Sanchawan village, in China's Shaanxi province.
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Original:  The woman was keeping birds in her home in violation of the ban on the practice by the Egyptian government .
Revised:  The woman was keeping birds in her home in violation of a government ban on the practice by the Egyptian government .
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Original:  The woman was keeping birds in her home in violation of the ban on the practice by the Egyptian government .
Revised:  The woman was keeping birds in her home in violation of the ban on the practice .
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Original: A second case of the human form has also been reported by the Egyptian Health Ministry.
Revised: A second case of human infection has also been reported by the Egyptian Health Ministry.
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Original:  Initial tests of the 28 year old man indicate  this is the second confirmed case in Egypt  and both cases were from the same area in the country.
Revised:  Initial tests of the 28 year old man indicate that this is the second confirmed case in Egypt and both cases were from the same area in the country.
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Original:  Initial tests of the 28 year old man indicate  this is the second confirmed case in Egypt  and both cases were from the same area in the country.
Revised:  Initial tests of the 28 year old man indicate this is the second confirmed case in Egypt , and both cases were from the same area in the country.
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Original:  Doctors are expecting the man to survive and both people had reportedly been treated with the drug Tamiflu
Revised:  Doctors are expecting the man to survive . Both people had reportedly been treated with the drug Tamiflu
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Original:  Both people had reportedly been treated with the drug Tamiflu  
Revised:  Both people had reportedly been treated with the drug Tamiflu . 
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Original: A second case of human infection has also been reported by the Egyptian Health Ministry .
Revised: The Egyptian Health Ministry .
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Original:  Initial tests of the 28 year old man indicate that this is the second confirmed case in Egypt, and both cases were from the same area in the country . Doctors are expecting the man to survive.
Revised:  Initial tests of the 28 year old man indicate that his is the second confirmed case in Egypt, and both cases were from the same area in the country . Doctors are expecting the man to survive.
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Original:  Initial tests of the 28 year old man indicate that this is the second confirmed case in Egypt, and both cases were from the same area in the country . Doctors are expecting the man to survive.
Revised:  Initial tests of the 28 year old man indicate that this is the second case of human infection in Egypt. Both cases were from the same area in the country . Doctors are expecting the man to survive.
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Original: A 30 year old Egyptian woman has died of a suspected infection with of the H5N1 strain of the avian flu  .
Revised: A 30 year old Egyptian woman has died from an infection with the H5N1 strain of the avian flu .
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Original:  Both cases were from the same area in the country, and both people had reportedly been treated with the drug Tamiflu.
Revised:  Both cases were from the same area in the country, and both people reportedly were treated with the drug Tamiflu.
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Original: A New York Times report tells of a shadowy military unit named Task Force 6-26 , which in early 2004, used a former Iraqi military base near Baghdad as a top-secret detention center.
Revised: A New York Times report tells of a shadowy military unit named Task Force 6-26 which, in early 2004, used a former Iraqi military base near Baghdad as a top-secret detention center.
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Original:  The Black Room was a garaged-sized room  painted jet-black  with no windows.
Revised:  The Black Room was a garaged-sized room , painted jet-black with no windows.
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Original:  The Black Room was a garaged-sized room  painted jet-black  with no windows.
Revised:  The Black Room was a garaged-sized room painted jet-black and with no windows.
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Original:  Inside soldiers would beat prisoners , abuse them verballyand use them as target practice with paintball guns in a nearby area.
Revised:  Inside , soldiers beat prisoners and abused them verbally. They used them for target practice with paintball guns in a nearby area.
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Original:  The temporary detention site was part of Camp Narma, the headquarters of Task Force 6-26 and was usually the first stop for many insurgents before going to  Abu Ghraib prison  which was a few miles away
Revised:  The temporary detention site was part of Camp Narma, the headquarters of Task Force 6-26 , and was the first stop for many insurgents before going to Abu Ghraib prison which was a few miles away
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Original:  The temporary detention site was part of Camp Narma, the headquarters of Task Force 6-26 and was usually the first stop for many insurgents before going to  Abu Ghraib prison  which was a few miles away
Revised:  The temporary detention site was part of Camp Narma, the headquarters of Task Force 6-26 and was usually the first stop for many insurgents before going to the Abu Ghraib prison which was a few miles away
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Original:  The temporary detention site was part of Camp Narma, the headquarters of Task Force 6-26 and was usually the first stop for many insurgents before going to  Abu Ghraib prison  which was a few miles away
Revised:  The temporary detention site was part of Camp Narma, the headquarters of Task Force 6-26 and was usually the first stop for many insurgents before going to Abu Ghraib prison , which was a few miles away
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Original: The Black Room was a garaged-sized room, painted jet-black and with no windows.
Revised: The Black Room was a garage-sized room, painted jet-black and with no windows.
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Original:  ( Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book". )
Revised:  Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book". )
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Original:  ( Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book". )
Revised:  ( Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book". 
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Original:  Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book" . Dawkins argued that people should "stop being so damn respectful".
Revised:  Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book" Dawkins argued that people should "stop being so damn respectful".
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Original:  Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book" . Dawkins argued that people should "stop being so damn respectful".
Revised:  Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book" . , and he argued that people should "stop being so damn respectful".
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Original:  Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book" , and he  argued that people should "stop being so damn respectful".
Revised:  Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book" . argued that people should "stop being so damn respectful".
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Original:   Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book". 
Revised:  ( Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book". 
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Original:   Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book". 
Revised:  Dawkins joked about how, unlike Islamic scholars, "a true 'scholar' studies more than one book". )
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Original:   , and supporters of rallied in today to protest what they feel is an "increased confidence of Islamists to censor free expression publicly".
Revised:  , and supporters of free speech rallied in London today to protest what they feel is an "increased confidence of Islamists to censor free expression publicly".
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Original:  McCallum said the reduction was necessary as a matter of law .
Revised:  McCallum said the reduction was necessary as a matter of law 
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Original:  The ambassadorship post had been vacant for 13 months which Australian former deputy prime minister Tim Fischer said was an "unforgivable" delay.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Australian paper, "The Age", is making reports about the activities of Bush and McCallum in their younger years and the Sydney Morning Herald alleges that personal connections were instrumental in the career advancements of both men .
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Original: Australia's major newspapers are highlighting the personal relationship between the president and his newly nominated Australian ambassador  . Both Phillip Hudson of "The Age" and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly goes back at least 39 years to when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
Revised: Australia's major newspapers are highlighting the personal relationship between the president and his newly nominated Australian ambassador , Robert McCallum . Both Phillip Hudson of "The Age" and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly goes back at least 39 years to when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
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Original:  The  ambassadorship post had been vacant for 13 months which Australian former deputy prime minister Tim Fischer said was an "unforgivable" delay.
Revised:  The Australian ambassadorship post had been vacant for 13 months which Australian former deputy prime minister Tim Fischer said was an "unforgivable" delay.
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Original:  The  ambassadorship post had been vacant for 13 months which Australian former deputy prime minister Tim Fischer said was an "unforgivable" delay.
Revised:  The ambassadorship post had been vacant for 13 months , which former deputy prime minister Tim Fischer said was an "unforgivable" delay.
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Original:  The Australian paper, "The Age" , is making reports about the activities of Bush and McCallum in their younger years and the Sydney Morning Herald alleges that personal connections were instrumental in the career advancements of both men.
Revised:  The Australian paper, The Age , is making reports about the activities of Bush and McCallum in their younger years and the Sydney Morning Herald alleges that personal connections were instrumental in the career advancements of both men.
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Original:  McCallum also made news last year when he overrode  Justice Department lawyers who had been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
Revised:  McCallum also made news last year when he overrode U.S. Justice Department lawyers who had been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
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Original:  Both Phillip Hudson of "The Age " and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly goes back at least 39 years to when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
Revised:  Both Phillip Hudson ofThe Age and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly goes back at least 39 years to when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
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