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Original:  Smith went onto suggest that GPs, Doctors and Practitioners should also examine a patient's social network to promote good health.
Revised:  Smith went onto suggest that General Practitioners should also examine a patient's social network to promote good health.
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Original:  The data presented here make a compelling case for social relationship factors to be added to that list" he continued .
Revised:  The data presented here make a compelling case for social relationship factors to be added to that list" he continued 
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Original:  The benefits of social interaction has been observed in most people regardless of age or gender
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Original: A recent scientifc review involving more than 300  000 people across several previous studies has revealed that inadequate social networking and frequent isolation can have equally negative effects on a person's health as smoking and alcohol abuse.
Revised: A recent scientifc review involving more than 300 , 000 people across several previous studies has revealed that inadequate social networking and frequent isolation can have equally negative effects on a person's health as smoking and alcohol abuse.
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Original: A recent scientifc review involving more than 300  000 people across several previous studies has revealed that inadequate social networking and frequent isolation can have equally negative effects on a person's health as smoking and alcohol abuse.
Revised: A recent scientifc review involving more than 300 000 people across several previous studies has revealed that inadequate social networking and frequent isolation can have negative effects on a person's health as smoking and alcohol abuse.
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Original:  compared to those who were more socially isolated The scientists on the project described having a poor relationship with family and poor quality friendships as equivalent to frequent substance abuse , that is to say, 15 cigarettes a day or heavy alcohol consumption , but considered worse for a person's health than not partcipating in exercise and being obese.
Revised:  compared to those who were more socially isolated The scientists on the project ranked having low-quality relationships with friends and family as equivalent to frequent substance abuse , that is to say, 15 cigarettes a day or heavy alcohol consumption , but considered worse for a person's health than not partcipating in exercise and being obese.
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Original:  compared to those who were more socially isolated The scientists on the project described having a poor relationship with family and poor quality friendships as equivalent to frequent substance abuse , that is to say, 15 cigarettes a day or heavy alcohol consumption , but considered worse for a person's health than not partcipating in exercise and being obese.
Revised:  compared to those who were more socially isolated The scientists on the project described having a poor relationship with family and poor quality friendships as equivalent to frequent substance abuse ( that is to say, 15 cigarettes a day or heavy alcohol consumption , but considered worse for a person's health than not partcipating in exercise and being obese.
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Original:  compared to those who were more socially isolated The scientists on the project described having a poor relationship with family and poor quality friendships as equivalent to frequent substance abuse , that is to say, 15 cigarettes a day or heavy alcohol consumption , but considered worse for a person's health than not partcipating in exercise and being obese.
Revised:  compared to those who were more socially isolated The scientists on the project described having a poor relationship with family and poor quality friendships as equivalent to frequent substance abuse , that is to say, 15 cigarettes a day or heavy alcohol consumption ) but worse for a person's health than not partcipating in exercise and being obese.
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Original:  compared to those who were more socially isolated The scientists on the project described having a poor relationship with family and poor quality friendships as equivalent to frequent substance abuse , that is to say, 15 cigarettes a day or heavy alcohol consumption , but considered worse for a person's health than not partcipating in exercise and being obese.
Revised:  compared to those who were more socially isolated The scientists on the project described having a poor relationship with family and poor quality friendships as equivalent to frequent substance abuse , that is to say, 15 cigarettes a day or heavy alcohol consumption , but considered worse for a person's health than not participating in exercise and being obese.
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Original:  The data presented here make a compelling case for social relationship factors to be added to that list  " he continued
Revised:  The data presented here make a compelling case for social relationship factors to be added to that list , " he continued
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Original: A recent scientifc review involving more than 300,000 people across several previous studies has revealed that inadequate social networking and frequent isolation can have negative effects on a person's health equal to that caused by smoking and alcohol abuse.
Revised: A recent scientific review involving more than 300,000 people across several previous studies has revealed that inadequate social networking and frequent isolation can have negative effects on a person's health equal to that caused by smoking and alcohol abuse.
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Original: A Boeing C-17 Globemaster III, operated by the United States Air Force, crashed 28 July 2010 near Elmendorf Air Force Base in Alaska at about 6:15 pm  , killing all four crew members.
Revised: A Boeing C-17 Globemaster III, operated by the United States Air Force, crashed July 28, 2010 near Elmendorf Air Force Base in Alaska at about 6:15 pm , killing all four crew members.
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Original:  The craft are used by the U.S.A., the United Kingdom, NATO, Australia, Canada, and Qatar
Revised:  The aircraft are used by the U.S.A., the United Kingdom, NATO, Australia, Canada, and Qatar
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Original:  The aircraft are used by the U.S.A. , the United Kingdom, NATO, Australia, Canada, and Qatar
Revised:  The aircraft are used by the United States , the United Kingdom, NATO, Australia, Canada, and Qatar
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Original: The Elmendorf base is near Anchorage , Alaska, and the fireball and plume were visible from that city's downtown.
Revised: The Elmendorf base is near , Alaska, and the fireball and plume were visible from that city's downtown.
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Original:  The aircraft are used by the United States, the United Kingdom, NATO, Australia, Canada, and Qatar  
Revised:  The aircraft are used by the United States, the United Kingdom, NATO, Australia, Canada, and Qatar . 
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Original:  However, because the full video had not been released yet, after the edited clip was released  the USDA forced Sherrod to resign.
Revised:  However, because the full video had not been released yet, after the edited clip was released , the USDA forced Sherrod to resign.
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Original:  Shirley Sherrod, an African-American USDA ( United States Department of Agriculture ) employee ousted last week, has said that she will "definitely sue" conservative blogger Andrew Breitbart over a video clip posted online at BigGovernment.com, which is presented by Breitbart, that made her appear racist.
Revised:  Shirley Sherrod, an African-American employee of the United States Department of Agriculture ) employee ousted last week, has said that she will "definitely sue" conservative blogger Andrew Breitbart over a video clip posted online at BigGovernment.com, which is presented by Breitbart, that made her appear racist.
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Original:  Shirley Sherrod, an African-American USDA ( United States Department of Agriculture ) employee ousted last week, has said that she will "definitely sue" conservative blogger Andrew Breitbart over a video clip posted online at BigGovernment.com, which is presented by Breitbart, that made her appear racist.
Revised:  Shirley Sherrod, an African-American USDA ( United States Department of Agriculture (USDA) who was ousted last week, has said that she will "definitely sue" conservative blogger Andrew Breitbart over a video clip posted online at BigGovernment.com, which is presented by Breitbart, that made her appear racist.
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Original:  Shirley Sherrod, an African-American USDA ( United States Department of Agriculture ) employee ousted last week, has said that she will "definitely sue" conservative blogger Andrew Breitbart over a video clip posted online at BigGovernment.com, which is presented by Breitbart, that made her appear racist.
Revised:  Shirley Sherrod, an African-American USDA ( United States Department of Agriculture ) employee ousted last week, has said that she will "definitely sue" conservative blogger Andrew Breitbart over a video clip posted online at BigGovernment.com, operated by Breitbart, that made her appear racist.
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Original:  Though Sherrod is referred to on the site as a "racist govt employee ", the video had been edited to make her appear in that light .
Revised:  Though Sherrod is referred to on the site as a "racist govt employee ," and the video had been edited to make her appear in that light .
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Original:  Instead of deliberately not giving full support to a white farmer because of his race, as it appeared in the edited clip, the full video revealed that Sherrod was actually speaking about racial reconciliation and the lessons she learned after the episode.
Revised:  Instead of deliberately not giving full support to a white farmer because of his race, as it appeared in the clip, the full video revealed that Sherrod was actually speaking about racial reconciliation and the lessons she learned after the episode.
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Original:  Sherrod had been speaking in March of this year at a NCAAP meeting.
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Original:  However, because the full video had not been released yet, after the edited clip was released, the USDA forced Sherrod to resign.
Revised:  However, because the full video had not been released yet, after the edited clip was released, the USDA asked Sherrod to resign.
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Original:  The farmer  and his wife later stated that Sherrod had eventually helped to save their farm, and after the full video was made public  Agriculture Secretary Tom Vilsack and US President Barack Obama apologised and Vilsack offered Sherrod a new job  .
Revised:  The farmer and his wife later stated that Sherrod had actually helped to save their farm, and after the full video was made public Agriculture Secretary Tom Vilsack and US President Barack Obama apologised and Vilsack offered Sherrod a new job .
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Original:  The farmer  and his wife later stated that Sherrod had eventually helped to save their farm, and after the full video was made public  Agriculture Secretary Tom Vilsack and US President Barack Obama apologised and Vilsack offered Sherrod a new job  .
Revised:  The farmer and his wife later stated that Sherrod had eventually helped to save their farm, and after the full video was made public , US Department of Agriculture Secretary Tom Vilsack and US President Barack Obama apologised and Vilsack offered Sherrod a new job .
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Original:  Breitbart has said that he posted the edited clip to prove that the NCAAP has racist elements, and has not yet apologised to Sherrod.
Revised:  Breitbart said that he posted the edited clip to prove that the NCAAP has racist elements, and has not yet apologised to Sherrod.
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Original:  Breitbart has said that he posted the edited clip to prove that the NCAAP has racist elements, and has not yet apologised to Sherrod.
Revised:  Breitbart has said that he posted the edited clip to prove that the NCAAP has racist elements, and has not apologised to Sherrod.
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Original:  "He had to know that he was targeting me," the 62 year-old said at a convention of  National Association of Black Journalists
Revised:  "He had to know that he was targeting me," the 62-year-old said at a convention of National Association of Black Journalists
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Original:  "He had to know that he was targeting me," the 62 year-old said at a convention of  National Association of Black Journalists
Revised:  "He had to know that he was targeting me," the 62 year-old said at a convention of the National Association of Black Journalists
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Original:  Breitbart said that he posted the edited clip to prove that the NCAAP has racist elements, and has not apologised to Sherrod.
Revised:  Breitbart said that he posted the edited clip to prove that the NAACP has racist elements, and has not apologised to Sherrod.
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Original:  Shortly before the video clip was posted, the NCAAP had demanded that the Tea Party, a conservative activist group that Breitbart is active in, remove racism from parts of that group.
Revised:  Shortly before the video clip was posted, the NAACP had demanded that the Tea Party, a conservative activist group that Breitbart is active in, remove racism from parts of that group.
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Original:  Sherrod had been speaking in March of this year at the National Association for a NAACP meeting.
Revised:  Sherrod had been speaking in March of this year at an NAACP meeting.
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Original:  Sherrod had been speaking in March of this year at an NAACP meeting.
Revised:  Sherrod spoke in March of this year at an NAACP meeting.
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Original:  Instead of deliberately not giving full support to a white farmer because of his race , as it appeared in the clip, the full video revealed that Sherrod was actually speaking about racial reconciliation and the lessons she learned after the episode .
Revised:  The clip taken from the original video footage of this meeting misconstues Sherrod as deliberately failing to support a white farmer because of his race , as it appeared in the clip, the full video revealed that Sherrod was actually speaking about racial reconciliation and the lessons she learned after the episode .
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Original:  Instead of deliberately not giving full support to a white farmer because of his race , as it appeared in the clip, the full video revealed that Sherrod was actually speaking about racial reconciliation and the lessons she learned after the episode .
Revised:  Instead of deliberately not giving full support to a white farmer because of his race . In reality, the full video revealed that Sherrod was actually speaking about racial reconciliation and the lessons she learned after the episode .
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Original:  Instead of deliberately not giving full support to a white farmer because of his race , as it appeared in the clip, the full video revealed that Sherrod was actually speaking about racial reconciliation and the lessons she learned after the episode .
Revised:  Instead of deliberately not giving full support to a white farmer because of his race , as it appeared in the clip, the full video revealed that Sherrod was speaking about racial reconciliation and the lessons she learned after the episode .
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Original:  The clip taken from the original video footage of this meeting misconstues Sherrod as deliberately failing to support a white farmer because of his race.
Revised:  The clip edited from the original video footage of this meeting misconstues Sherrod as deliberately failing to support a white farmer because of his race.
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Original:  The clip taken from the original video footage of this meeting misconstues Sherrod as deliberately failing to support a white farmer because of his race.
Revised:  The clip taken from the original video footage of this meeting misrepresents Sherrod as deliberately failing to support a white farmer because of his race.
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Original:  However, because the full video had not been released yet, after the edited clip was released, the USDA asked Sherrod to resign  .
Revised:  However, the USDA asked Sherrod to resign .
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Original: As many as 140 people are feared dead after a boat sank on the Kasai River, a tributary of the Congo River, in the Democratic Republic of the Congo , a country in central Africa .
Revised: As many as 140 people are feared dead after a boat sank on the Kasai River, a tributary of the Congo River, in the Democratic Republic of the Congo .
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Original:  The accident occurred in the province of Bandundu, approxiamtely 30km from the provincial capital, where officials reportedly held a crisis meeting to deal with the incident.
Revised:  The accident occurred in the province of Bandundu, approximately 30km from the provincial capital, where officials reportedly held a crisis meeting to deal with the incident.
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Original:   The sinking was reportedly the result of hitting a mud bank in the shallow river, due to it being the dry season in the Congo , causing the vessel to capsize.
Revised:  It is the dry season in the Congo, so the river is shallow. The sinking was reportedly the result of hitting a mud bank in the shallow river, due to it being the dry season in the Congo , causing the vessel to capsize.
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Original:   The sinking was reportedly the result of hitting a mud bank in the shallow river, due to it being the dry season in the Congo , causing the vessel to capsize.
Revised:  The sinking was reportedly the result of hitting a mud bank , causing the vessel to capsize.
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Original:  French prosecutors confirmed on Thursday nursing assistant Dominique Cottrez killed her eight newborn infants and burying their remains.
Revised:  French prosecutors confirmed on Thursday nursing assistant Dominique Cottrez killed her eight newborn infants and buried their remains.
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Original: According to prosecutors, Corttrez , in her 40s, is heavy-set and she was able to hide her eight pregnancies.
Revised: According to prosecutors, Cottrez , in her 40s, is heavy-set and she was able to hide her eight pregnancies.
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Original:  Investigators discovered an additional six children in the Cottres 's house in Villers-au-Tertre.
Revised:  Investigators discovered an additional six children in the Cottrez 's house in Villers-au-Tertre.
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Original:  The killings occurred over a time span of several years, from 1989 to 2006 or '07.
Revised:  The killings occurred over a time span of several years, from 1989 to 2006 or 2007.
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Original: Cottrez's Facebook profile photo .
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Original: File:2010 Crown Fire.jpg|250px|A large pyrocumulus cloud from the Crown Fire in Agua Dulce, California covers the skyline of much of the Southland Thursday evening ]] A huge wildfire that has been burning in the High Desert of Southern California since 2pm yesterday continues to threaten residents in the city of Palmdale in the Antelope Valley region of the Los Angeles County this afternoon.
Revised: File:2010 Crown Fire.jpg|250px|A large pyrocumulus cloud from the Crown Fire in Agua Dulce, California covers the skyline of much of the Southland Thursday evening ]] A huge wildfire that has been burning in the High Desert of Southern California since 2:00 pm (2200 UTC) yesterday continues to threaten residents in the city of Palmdale in the Antelope Valley region of the Los Angeles County this afternoon.
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Original:  The second fire, the "Briggs Fire", began at around 2:00 pm (22:00 UTC) near 8334 Soledad Canyon Road and Briggs Road, south of the freeway.
Revised:  The second fire, the "Briggs Fire", began at around 2:00 pm near 8334 Soledad Canyon Road and Briggs Road, south of the freeway.
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Original:  The fire burned down a Los Angeles County Sherriff Department communications tower, forcing Lancaster and Palmdale-based deputies to set up mobile operations bases and communicate and coordinate their efforts with cell phones and computer texting.
Revised:  The fire burned down a Los Angeles County Sheriff Department communications tower, forcing Lancaster and Palmdale-based deputies to set up mobile operations bases and communicate and coordinate their efforts with cell phones and computer texting.
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Original:  Weather conditions and topography have hindered their effors , as temperatures rose to 98 degrees Fahrenheit today, with windspeeds of 25mph.
Revised:  Weather conditions and topography have hindered their efforts , as temperatures rose to 98 degrees Fahrenheit today, with windspeeds of 25mph.
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Original:  The fire burned down a Los Angeles County Sheriff Department communications tower, forcing Lancaster and Palmdale-based deputies to set up mobile operations bases and communicate and coordinate their efforts with cell phones and computer texting . Last night, the California Aqueduct acted as a barrier to the fire.
Revised:  The fire burned down a Los Angeles County Sheriff Department communications tower, forcing Lancaster and Palmdale-based deputies to set up mobile operations bases and coordinate their efforts with cell phones and computer texting . Last night, the California Aqueduct acted as a barrier to the fire.
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Original:  The fire burned down a Los Angeles County Sheriff Department communications tower, forcing Lancaster and Palmdale-based deputies to set up mobile operations bases and communicate and coordinate their efforts with cell phones and computer texting . Last night, the California Aqueduct acted as a barrier to the fire.
Revised:  The fire burned down a Los Angeles County Sheriff Department communications tower, forcing Lancaster and Palmdale-based deputies to set up mobile operations bases and communicate and coordinate their efforts using cell phones and computer texting . Last night, the California Aqueduct acted as a barrier to the fire.
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Original:  The fire burned down a Los Angeles County Sheriff Department communications tower, forcing Lancaster and Palmdale-based deputies to set up mobile operations bases and communicate and coordinate their efforts with cell phones and computer texting . Last night, the California Aqueduct acted as a barrier to the fire.
Revised:  The fire burned down a Los Angeles County Sheriff Department communications tower, forcing Lancaster and Palmdale-based deputies to set up mobile operations bases and communicate and coordinate their efforts with cell phones and computers . Last night, the California Aqueduct acted as a barrier to the fire.
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Original:  However, as winds picked up in the afternoon, fire embers were carried across the aqueduct , and the fire is now heading towards a highly-populated area of Palmdale.
Revised:  However, as winds picked up in the afternoon, fire embers were carried across the aqueduct and the fire is now heading towards a highly-populated area of Palmdale.
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Original:  21 customers in the immediate vicinity are currently without power and have been since yesterday.
Revised:  21 customers in the immediate vicinity have been without power since yesterday.
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