wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The protest was organised the New South Wales Greens and was addressed by several speakers including Damien Lawson and Lee Rhiannon, an elected Greens parliamentarian from the New South Wales Legislative Council.
Revised:  The protest was organised the New South Wales Greens and was addressed by several speakers , includingLee Rhiannon, an elected Greens parliamentarian from the New South Wales Legislative Council.
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Original:  Protester outside New South Wales ParliamentOne protester carried a placard which read: "Terrorism Laws=Fascism  " . She compared the proposed legislation to the 1933 German Enabling Act, saying "It is the most basic rule of democracy is that you have the right to legal representation and Hitler took that away, that was Habeas corpus as it was called, in 1933 legislation and from that moment on thats when everything began.
Revised:  Protester outside New South Wales ParliamentOne protester carried a placard which read: "Terrorism Laws=Fascism ! " . She compared the proposed legislation to the 1933 German Enabling Act, saying "It is the most basic rule of democracy is that you have the right to legal representation and Hitler took that away, that was Habeas corpus as it was called, in 1933 legislation and from that moment on thats when everything began.
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Original:  Protester outside New South Wales ParliamentOne protester carried a placard which read: "Terrorism Laws=Fascism  " . She compared the proposed legislation to the 1933 German Enabling Act, saying "It is the most basic rule of democracy is that you have the right to legal representation and Hitler took that away, that was Habeas corpus as it was called, in 1933 legislation and from that moment on thats when everything began.
Revised:  Protester outside New South Wales ParliamentOne protester carried a placard which read: "Terrorism Laws=Fascism " She compared the proposed legislation to the 1933 German Enabling Act, saying "It is the most basic rule of democracy is that you have the right to legal representation and Hitler took that away, that was Habeas corpus as it was called, in 1933 legislation and from that moment on thats when everything began.
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Original:  The protest was organised  the New South Wales Greens and was addressed by several speakers, including Lee Rhiannon, an elected Greens parliamentarian from the New South Wales Legislative Council.
Revised:  The protest was organised by the New South Wales Greens and was addressed by several speakers, including Lee Rhiannon, an elected Greens parliamentarian from the New South Wales Legislative Council.
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Original:  MESSENGER is the first artificial satellite to be place in orbit around Mercury.
Revised:  MESSENGER is the first artificial satellite to be placed in orbit around Mercury.
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Original:  Because Mercury is the innermost planet in the , the sun's gravitational attraction increased the spacecraft's energy .
Revised:  Because Mercury is the innermost planet in the , the sun's gravitational attraction altered the spacecraft's energy .
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Original:  Because Mercury is the innermost planet in the , the sun's gravitational attraction increased the spacecraft's energy .
Revised:  Because Mercury is the innermost planet in the , the sun's gravitational attraction increased the spacecraft's approach to the planet .
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Original:  NASA is to continuing to release images taken by the spacecraft as the arrive at Earth.
Revised:  NASA is continuing to release images taken by the spacecraft as the arrive at Earth.
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Original:  NASA is to continuing to release images taken by the spacecraft as the arrive at Earth.
Revised:  NASA is to continuing to release images taken by the spacecraft as they arrive at Earth.
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Original:  Some of the scientific goals the probe is to accomplish are: determining the geologic composition of Mercury, study of the planet's magnetic field and internal composition, and the transmission of over 75,000 images back to Earth.
Revised:  Some of the scientific goals the probe is to accomplish are: determination of the geologic composition of Mercury, study of the planet's magnetic field and internal composition, and the transmission of over 75,000 images back to Earth.
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Original:  Some of the scientific goals the probe is to accomplish are: determining the geologic composition of Mercury, study of the planet's magnetic field and internal composition, and the transmission of over 75,000 images back to Earth.
Revised:  Some of the scientific goals the probe is to accomplish are: determining the geologic composition of Mercury, study of the planet's magnetic field and internal composition, and transmission of more than 75,000 images back to Earth.
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Original: Australian agencies under the responsibility of the federal Treasurer, Peter Costello, spent approximately $17,000 AUD on massage services in 2004, namely the Australian Bureau of Statistics (ABS) and the Australian Securities and Investments Commission (ASIC).
Revised: Australian agencies under the responsibility of the federal Treasurer, Peter Costello, spent approximately 
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Original:  The Australian Labor Party member Christopher Bowen asked the Treasurer for details on massage services in a question on notice, and received the answer on October 31.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 637 ASIC staff made use of massages, compared with only 50 in the ABS, who however spent more on massages than ASIC
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 637 ASIC staff made use of massages, compared with only 50 in the ABS, who however spent more on massages than ASIC
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Original: Mr. Kussa is the highest ranking government official of Libya to defect as of late, and is a blow to Gaddaffi, as his government in recent weeks has been trying to crush the rebel fighters that have sprung-up after a series of protests  revolutions occurred throughout the Middle-East, demanding that their abusive leaders step down from power.
Revised: Mr. Kussa is the highest ranking government official of Libya to defect as of late, and is a blow to Gaddaffi, as his government in recent weeks has been trying to crush rebellions that have sprung-up after a series of protests revolutions occurred throughout the Middle-East, demanding that their abusive leaders step down from power.
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Original: Mr. Kussa is the highest ranking government official of Libya to defect as of late, and is a blow to Gaddaffi, as his government in recent weeks has been trying to crush the rebel fighters that have sprung-up after a series of protests  revolutions occurred throughout the Middle-East, demanding that their abusive leaders step down from power.
Revised: Mr. Kussa is the highest ranking government official of Libya to defect as of late, and is a blow to Gaddaffi, as his government in recent weeks has been trying to crush the rebel fighters that have sprung-up after a series of protests and revolutions occurred throughout the Middle-East, demanding that their abusive leaders step down from power.
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Original:  Before the defection, it was reported that Government forces have recently taken back the port-town of Ras Lanuf and the nearby town of Bin Jawad.
Revised:  Before the defection, it was reported that government forces have recently taken back the port-town of Ras Lanuf and the nearby town of Bin Jawad.
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Original: Libyan foreign minister Mussa Kussa has fled to the United Kingdom and has announced that he is no longer willing to work for Col.
Revised: Libyan foreign minister Mussa Kussa has fled to the United Kingdom and has announced that he is no longer willing to work for 
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Original:  A spokesman for the UK government stated that Mr. Kussa "arrived at Farnborough Airport on 30 March from Tunisia.
Revised:  A spokesman for the UK government said Kussa "arrived at Farnborough Airport on 30 March from Tunisia.
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Original:  A spokesman for the UK government stated that Mr. Kussa "arrived at Farnborough Airport on 30 March from Tunisia.
Revised:  A spokesman for the UK government stated that Mr. Kussa "arrived at on 30 March from Tunisia.
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Original:  He travelled here under his own free will." he also stated that, "Moussa Kussa is one of the most senior figures in Gaddafi's government and his role was to represent the regime internationally - something that he is no longer willing to do.
Revised:  He travelled here under his own free will." He added: "Moussa Kussa is one of the most senior figures in Gaddafi's government and his role was to represent the regime internationally - something that he is no longer willing to do.
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Original:  He travelled here under his own free will." he also stated that, "Moussa Kussa is one of the most senior figures in Gaddafi's government and his role was to represent the regime internationally - something that he is no longer willing to do.
Revised:  He travelled here under his own free will." he also stated that, "Moussa Kussa is one of the most senior figures in Gaddafi's government and his role was to represent the regime internationally — something that he is no longer willing to do.
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Original:  Mr. Kussa is the highest ranking government official of Libya to defect as of late, and is a blow to Gaddaffi, as his government in recent weeks has been trying to crush rebellions that have sprung-up after a series of protests and revolutions occurred throughout the Middle-East, demanding that their abusive leaders step down from power.
Revised:  Kussa is the highest ranking government official of Libya to defect as of late, and is a blow to Gaddaffi, as his government in recent weeks has been trying to crush rebellions that have sprung-up after a series of protests and revolutions occurred throughout the Middle-East, demanding that their abusive leaders step down from power.
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Original:  Mr. Kussa is the highest ranking government official of Libya to defect as of late, and is a blow to Gaddaffi, as his government in recent weeks has been trying to crush rebellions that have sprung-up after a series of protests and revolutions occurred throughout the Middle-East, demanding that their abusive leaders step down from power.
Revised:  Mr. Kussa is the highest ranking government official of Libya to defect as of late, and is a blow to Gaddaffi, as his government in recent weeks has been trying to crush rebellions that have sprung-up after a series of protests and revolutions occurred throughout the Middle East, demanding their abusive leaders step down from power.
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Original:  Before the defection, it was reported that government forces have recently taken back the port-town of Ras Lanuf and the nearby town of Bin Jawad.
Revised:  Before the defection, it was reported government forces have recently taken back the port-town of Ras Lanuf and the nearby town of Bin Jawad.
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Original:  It is as 'logical' as any other theory. 
Revised:  It is as 'logical' as any other theory. "
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Original:  The board now contains enough Conservative members to demand inclusion of Intelligent Design in the school curriculum.
Revised:  The board now contains enough Conservative members to vote for inclusion of Intelligent Design in the school curriculum.
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Original:  In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, believers in the Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by The Flying Spaghetti Monster next to evolution and Intelligent Design.
Revised:  In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, "believers" in the The Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by The Flying Spaghetti Monster next to evolution and Intelligent Design.
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Original:  In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, believers in the Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by The Flying Spaghetti Monster next to evolution and Intelligent Design.
Revised:  In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, believers in the Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by the Flying Spaghetti Monster next to evolution and Intelligent Design.
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Original:  In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, believers in the Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by The Flying Spaghetti Monster next to evolution and Intelligent Design.
Revised:  In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, believers in the Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by The Flying Spaghetti Monster next to Darwinism and Intelligent Design.
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Original: In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, "believers" in the The Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by the Flying Spaghetti Monster next to Darwinism and Intelligent Design.
Revised: In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, "believers" in the Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by the Flying Spaghetti Monster next to Darwinism and Intelligent Design.
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Original: In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, "believers" in the The Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by the Flying Spaghetti Monster next to Darwinism and Intelligent Design.
Revised: In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, "believers" in the The Flying Spaghetti Monster are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by the Flying Spaghetti Monster next to Darwinism and Intelligent Design.
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Original: In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, "believers" in the The Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by the Flying Spaghetti Monster next to Darwinism and Intelligent Design.
Revised: In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, "believers" in the The Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas school board, calling for it to require that creation by the Flying Spaghetti Monster next to Darwinism and Intelligent Design.
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Original: In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, "believers" in the The Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by the Flying Spaghetti Monster next to Darwinism and Intelligent Design.
Revised: In an apparent attempt to make the inclusion of Intelligent Design into the curriculum seem foolish, "believers" in the The Flying Spaghetti Monster (FSMism) are lobbying the Kansas School Board to give equal time to teaching the concept of creation by the Flying Spaghetti Monster be taught alongside Darwinism and Intelligent Design.
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Original: In 1999, Kansas also wrote Creationism, a precursor of Intelligent Design, into the public school school curriculum.
Revised: In 1999, Kansas also wrote Creationism, a precursor of Intelligent Design, into the public school curriculum.
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Original:  The 2011 census findings suggest a preference to children as opposed to amongst Indian residents.
Revised:  The 2011 census findings have suggested a preference to children as opposed to amongst Indian residents.
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Original:  However, in - the capital of India - only 866 females exist for every one thousand male individuals   
Revised:  However, in - the capital of India - only 866 females exist for every one thousand male individuals . 
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Original: The results of a in Indiahave revealed that the of the country has increased by 181 million in the space of one decade, a figure close to what had been predicted and 17.6 \% greater than the results of the census held there in 2001.
Revised: India's reports that the of the country has increased by 181 million in the space of one decade, a figure close to what had been predicted and 17.6 \% greater than the results of the census held there in 2001.
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Original: The results of a in Indiahave revealed that the of the country has increased by 181 million in the space of one decade, a figure close to what had been predicted and 17.6 \% greater than the results of the census held there in 2001.
Revised: The results of a in Indiahave revealed that the of the country has increased by 181 million in the space of one decade, a figure 17.6 \% greater than the results of the census held there in 2001.
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Original: The results of a in Indiahave revealed that the of the country has increased by 181 million in the space of one decade, a figure close to what had been predicted and 17.6 \% greater than the results of the census held there in 2001.
Revised: The results of a in Indiahave revealed that the of the country has increased by 181 million in the space of one decade, a figure close to what had been predicted and 17.6 percent greater than 2001.
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Original:  According to the census results, which were publicised on Thursday,  the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, and India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area , " according to C.
Revised:  The census results, which were publicised on Thursday, the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, and India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area , " according to C.
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Original:  According to the census results, which were publicised on Thursday,  the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, and India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area , " according to C.
Revised:  According to the census results, publicised on Thursday, the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, and India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area , " according to C.
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Original:  According to the census results, which were publicised on Thursday,  the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, and India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area , " according to C.
Revised:  According to the census results, which were publicised on Thursday, show the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, and India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area , " according to C.
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Original:  According to the census results, which were publicised on Thursday,  the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, and India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area , " according to C.
Revised:  According to the census results, which were publicised on Thursday, the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, while India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area , " according to C.
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Original:  According to the census results, which were publicised on Thursday,  the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, and India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area , " according to C.
Revised:  According to the census results, which were publicised on Thursday, the population of India now stands at 1.21 billion , which is "over 17 percent of the world population, and India is 2.4 percent of the world’s surface area . " according to C.
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Original: The latest census concluded in February 2011, after six hundred thousand and seven thousand were approached by two and a half million officials, in an exercise at the expense of more than 492,000 (21,930,000, 305,000, 346,000).
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Original:  As a whole, the population of Indiahas increased at a rate in excess of 17 \% since the 2001 India census.
Revised:  While India's population has increased by more than 17 \% since the 2001 India census.
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Original:  As a whole, the population of Indiahas increased at a rate in excess of 17 \% since the 2001 India census.
Revised:  As a whole, the population of Indiahas increased at a rate in excess of 17 percent since the 2001 India census.
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Original:  This growth rate is at its lowest since India achieved independence in 1947.
Revised:  This growth rate is the lowest since India achieved independence in 1947.
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Original:  Between 1991 - 2001, the population growth rate stood at 21 \% ;
Revised:  Between 1991 and 2001, the population growth rate stood at 21 \% ;
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Original:  Between 1991 - 2001, the population growth rate stood at 21 \% ;
Revised:  Between 1991 - 2001, the population growth rate was 21 \% ;
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Original:  Between 1991 - 2001, the population growth rate stood at 21 \% ;
Revised:  Between 1991 - 2001, the population growth rate stood at 21 percent ;
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Original:  between 1981 - 1991, it was a recorded 23 \%.
Revised:  between 1981 and 1991, it was a recorded 23 \%.
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Original:  between 1981 - 1991, it was a recorded 23 \%.
Revised:  between 1981 - 1991, it was a recorded 23 percent.
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Original:  Approximately 25 \% of Indians over the age of seven were found to be in the 2011 census, a decrease of 10\% from the census held ten years ago.
Revised:  Approximately 25 percent of Indians over the age of seven were found to be in the 2011 census, a decrease of 10\% from the census held ten years ago.
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Original:  The 2011 census findings have suggested a preference to children as opposed to amongst Indian residents .
Revised:  The 2011 census findings have suggested a preference to children over .
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Original:  For every one thousand boys aged below seven, there were 914 girls, a decrease from the 2001 census, which reported of 927 females for every one thousand of male children.
Revised:  For every one thousand boys below the age of seven, there were 914 girls, a decrease from the 2001 census, which reported of 927 females for every one thousand of male children.
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Original:  This pattern remains consistent although the has prohibited hospitals from disclosing the gender of an . According to , parents in a large amount of India abort fetuses and young female children are for financial reasons.
Revised:  This pattern remains consistent although the has prohibited hospitals from disclosing the gender of an . According to , parents in a large area of India abort fetuses and young female children are for financial reasons.
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