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Original:  Sky Diving career On the 20th of April 1979, Rachel became the first female skydiver for India, starting her career by completing her “A” license from the Skydiving Federation of India at Agra.
Revised:  Skydiving career On the 20th of April 1979, Rachel became the first female skydiver for India, starting her career by completing her “A” license from the Skydiving Federation of India at Agra.
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Original:  Training & Practice 1987: Obtained special permission to train and practice with the Indian Airforce at the Para Training School, Agra, where she completed her first skydive jump on the 29th of Dec 1987.
Revised:  Training & practice 1987: Obtained special permission to train and practice with the Indian Airforce at the Para Training School, Agra, where she completed her first skydive jump on the 29th of Dec 1987.
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Original:  Demonstration Jumps 1995: Skydived at the opening ceremony for the First National Youth Festival (YUVA UTSAV) at Bhopal.
Revised:  Demonstration jumps 1995: Skydived at the opening ceremony for the First National Youth Festival (YUVA UTSAV) at Bhopal.
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Original: • Took part in the Air – Show -2000, organized by the Aero Club of India, at Safderjung Airport.
Revised:  Took part in the Air – Show -2000, organized by the Aero Club of India, at Safderjung Airport.
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Original:  • North Pole Jump from MI-8 on 20th April.
Revised:  North Pole Jump from MI-8 on 20th April.
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Original:  2002. Was the First Indian Woman to Skydive at the North Pole in minus 45-55 Degree Centigrade from 7,000 feet, during which time she had to stay at the 89th Latitude for 6 days due to bad weather before her jump.
Revised:  2002. Was the First Indian Woman to Skydive at the North Pole in minus 45-55 °C from 7,000 feet, during which time she had to stay at the 89th Latitude for 6 days due to bad weather before her jump.
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Original:  • Jumped at Chez Republic from an MI-8 aircraft.
Revised:  Jumped at Chez Republic from an MI-8 aircraft.
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Original:  Rachel’s first child, Dennis, was born a year later and her daughter, Annie, at the age of 20, who was a Femina Miss India winner in 1998.
Revised:  Their first child, Dennis, was born a year later and her daughter, Annie, at the age of 20, who was a Femina Miss India winner in 1998.
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Original:  Rachel’s first child, Dennis, was born a year later and her daughter, Annie, at the age of 20, who was a Femina Miss India winner in 1998.
Revised:  Rachel’s first child, Dennis, was born a year later . Her daughter, Annie, at the age of 20, who was a Femina Miss India winner in 1998.
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Original:  Rachel’s first child, Dennis, was born a year later and her daughter, Annie, at the age of 20, who was a Femina Miss India winner in 1998.
Revised:  Rachel’s first child, Dennis, was born a year later and her daughter, Annie, at the age of 20, would become a Femina Miss India winner in 1998.
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Original:  Rachel graduated from Agra University, with a Gold Medal in Literature.
Revised:  Thomas graduated from Agra University, with a Gold Medal in Literature.
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Original:  Skydiving career On the 20th of April 1979, Rachel became the first female skydiver for India, starting her career by completing her “A” license from the Skydiving Federation of India at Agra.
Revised:  Skydiving career On 20 April 1979, Rachel became the first female skydiver for India, starting her career by completing her “A” license from the Skydiving Federation of India at Agra.
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Original:  Rachel was just 24 years old, a mother of two kids and a civilian when she had achieved this feat.
Revised:  She was just 24 years old, a mother of two kids and a civilian when she had achieved this feat.
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Original:  Rachel was just 24 years old, a mother of two kids and a civilian when she had achieved this feat.
Revised:  Rachel was just 24 years old, a mother of two children, and a civilian when she had achieved this feat.
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Original:  Rachel was just 24 years old, a mother of two kids and a civilian when she had achieved this feat.
Revised:  Rachel was just 24 years old, a mother of two kids and a civilian when she achieved this feat.
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Original:  Rachel did her first demonstration jump at Jabalpur for the Army Ordnance C, Celebration using a Para Commander for the first time.
Revised:  Thomas did her first demonstration jump at Jabalpur for the Army Ordnance C, Celebration using a Para Commander for the first time.
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Original:  This led her to meet Mr. Claude Gillard, President of the Australian Parachuting Federation, a Delegate at the Conference, who invited her to attend the Australian National Parachuting Championship in Australia the following year.
Revised:  This led her to meet Claude Gillard, President of the Australian Parachuting Federation, a Delegate at the Conference, who invited her to attend the Australian National Parachuting Championship in Australia the following year.
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Original:  Rachel Thomas, September 1986 1986: Rachel received a scholarship from the Hon.
Revised:  Thomas, September 1986 1986: Rachel received a scholarship from the Hon.
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Original:  Rachel Thomas, September 1986 1986: Rachel received a scholarship from the Hon.
Revised:  Rachel Thomas, September 1986 1986: Thomas received a scholarship from the Hon.
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Original:  Rachel also trained as an Accuracy Jumper.
Revised:  She also trained as an Accuracy Jumper.
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Original:  World National competitions 1987: The 4th World Cup of Champions in Accuracy Parachuting, Seoul.
Revised:  World and national competitions 1987: The 4th World Cup of Champions in Accuracy Parachuting, Seoul.
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Original:  Was the first competition in which Rachel represented India.
Revised:  This was the first competition in which Rachel represented India.
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Original:  Was the first competition in which Rachel represented India.
Revised:  Was the first competition in which Thomas represented India.
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Original:  At National Level 1991: The First National Skydiving Competition was held at Hindon, Airforce Station It was organized by the Airforce Adventure Foundation.
Revised:  At national level 1991: The First National Skydiving Competition was held at Hindon, Airforce Station It was organized by the Airforce Adventure Foundation.
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Original:  Rachel was the only civilian and female competitor.
Revised:  Thomas was the only civilian and female competitor.
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Original:  Rachel Thomas, Sweden 1988 1989: Obtained special permission to train with the Turk Hava Kuram - the Aero Club of Turkey with their team.
Revised:  1989: Obtained special permission to train with the Turk Hava Kuram - the Aero Club of Turkey with their team.
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Original:  Rachel was unable to continue judging internationally as she was unable to be current in her qualification, due to no competitions taking place in India.
Revised:  Thomas was unable to continue judging internationally as she was unable to be current in her qualification, due to no competitions taking place in India.
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Original:  Rachel Thomas at the North Pole, 2002 Demonstration jumps 1995: Skydived at the opening ceremony for the First National Youth Festival (YUVA UTSAV) at Bhopal.
Revised:  Thomas at the North Pole, 2002 Demonstration jumps 1995: Skydived at the opening ceremony for the First National Youth Festival (YUVA UTSAV) at Bhopal.
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Original:  Shankar Dayal Sharma, who signed her log book for her, writing “Congratulations” Rachel Thomas receiving Padma Shree 2000: Took part in “Operation Royal Salute” with the Jordian Special Forces in memory of the Late King Hussein of Jordan and the Marine Veteran Jumpers.
Revised:  Shankar Dayal Sharma, who signed her log book for her, writing "Congratulations". Rachel Thomas receiving Padma Shree 2000: Took part in “Operation Royal Salute” with the Jordian Special Forces in memory of the Late King Hussein of Jordan and the Marine Veteran Jumpers.
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Original:  Shankar Dayal Sharma, who signed her log book for her, writing “Congratulations” Rachel Thomas receiving Padma Shree 2000: Took part in “Operation Royal Salute” with the Jordian Special Forces in memory of the Late King Hussein of Jordan and the Marine Veteran Jumpers.
Revised:  Shankar Dayal Sharma, who signed her log book for her, writing “Congratulations” Thomas receiving Padma Shree 2000: Took part in “Operation Royal Salute” with the Jordian Special Forces in memory of the Late King Hussein of Jordan and the Marine Veteran Jumpers.
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Original:  Rachel also jumped with the Prince of Jordan.
Revised:  Thomas also jumped with the Prince of Jordan.
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Original:  Took part in the Air – Show -2000 , organized by the Aero Club of India, at Safderjung Airport.
Revised:  Took part in the Air-Show-2000 , organized by the Aero Club of India, at Safderjung Airport.
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Original:  2003: Jumped for the Youth Festival at on 12th January 2003 and unfortunately broke her femur bone.
Revised:  2003: Jumped for the Youth Festival at on 12th January 2003 and broke her femur bone.
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Original:  That was her last jump up to date.
Revised:  That was her last jump to date.
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Original:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
Revised:  Other achievements Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
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Original:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
Revised:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
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Original:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
Revised:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump jump Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
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Original:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
Revised:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
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Original:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
Revised:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
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Original:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 Countries in all)
Revised:  Other achievements • Was honored by the late President of Macedonia H.E. Boris Trajkovski, in 2002 after her North Pole Jump • Has a total of 656 freefall jumps to her credit. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has jumped from nearly 16 different aircraft. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • Has skydived in Australia, U.S.A, Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 countries in all)
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Original:  Has skydived in Australia, U.S. A , Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 countries in all)
Revised:  Has skydived in Australia, U.S. , Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 countries in all)
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Original:  Has skydived in Australia, U.S. A , Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Chez Republic and Jordan (11 countries in all)
Revised:  Has skydived in Australia, U.S. A , Holland, South Korea, Sweden, Thailand, Turkey, Russia, Austria, Czech Republic and Jordan (11 countries in all)
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Original:  A former employee of Indian Railways, she was the first female to compete for India in a skydiving competition in 1987 and has the record of being the first Indian female to skydive over the North Pole in 2002.
Revised:  A former employee of Indian Railways, she was the first woman to compete for India in a skydiving competition in 1987 and has the record of being the first Indian female to skydive over the North Pole in 2002.
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Original:  It has recently been updated as  Technical Bulletin 117-2013.
Revised:  It has recently been updated as a Technical Bulletin 117-2013.
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Original:  This test exposes fabrics and foams to burning cigarettes for 45 minutes.
Revised:  The test exposes fabrics and foams to burning cigarettes for 45 minutes.
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Original: Bagh print tableau on republic day parade The Tableau of Bagh Prints was displayed in Republic Day Celebration Parade 2011 at New Delhi, in this tableau Mohammed Yusuf Khatri exhibited the live demonstration of Bagh Print Craft.
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Original: Mohammed Yusuf Khatri is an Indian master craftsman born:, in village of Bagh, Madhya Pradesh, who had learnt the traditional Craft of Bagh Print at a young age by his father Ismail Khatri and mother Mrs Jetun bee .
Revised: Mohammed Yusuf Khatri is an Indian master craftsman born:, in village of Bagh, Madhya Pradesh, who had learnt the traditional Craft of Bagh Print at a young age by his father Ismail Khatri and mother Mrs Jetun Khatri .
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Original:  Kerala Sangeetha Nataka Akademi awarded him its Fellowship in 2003.
Revised:  Kerala Sangeetha Nataka Akademi Fellowship in 2003.
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Original:  Colchis was interconnected with the Hellenic world, whereas Iberia was influenced by the Achaemenid Empire until Alexander the Great annihilated it.
Revised:  Colchis was interconnected with the Hellenic world, whereas Iberia was influenced by the Achaemenid Empire until Alexander the Great conquered it.
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Original:  Harcourt. Refences References Category:  New Zealand anthropologists Category:History of Oceania Category: Year of birth missing Category:1904 deat
Revised:  Harcourt. References Category: New Zealand anthropologists Category:History of Oceania Category: Year of birth missing Category:1904 deat
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Original:  Pan-Pacific, April-June , 10. 1944: Pacific Islands in war and peace.
Revised:  Pan-Pacific, April–June , 10. 1944: Pacific Islands in war and peace.
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Original:  Both Donald and Roger were undergraduates at Stanford University and maintained  strong relationships with the institution throughout their lifetimes .
Revised:  Roger was an undergraduate at Stanford University and maintained strong relationships with the institution throughout their lifetimes .
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Original:  Both Donald and Roger were undergraduates at Stanford University and maintained  strong relationships with the institution throughout their lifetimes .
Revised:  Both Donald and Roger were undergraduates at Stanford University and maintained a strong relationships with the institution throughout their lifetimes .
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Original:  With a degree in anthropology from the University of New Zealand, she spent most of her working life in the United States, where she worked closely with her husband, a fellow New Zealander and renowned anthropologist Felix Maxwell Keesing.
Revised:  With a degree in anthropology from the University of New Zealand, she spent most of her working life in the United States, where she worked closely with her husband, a fellow New Zealander and renowned anthropologist Felix M Keesing.
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Original:  With a degree in anthropology from the University of New Zealand, she spent most of her working life in the United States, where she worked closely with her husband, a fellow New Zealander and renowned anthropologist Felix M Keesing.
Revised:  With a degree in anthropology from the University of New Zealand, she spent most of her working life in the United States, where she worked closely with her husband, a fellow New Zealander and renowned anthropologist Felix Maxwell Keesing.
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Original:  He also founded a temperance movement in Azumino, which drew the wrath of locals for its aggressive approach again drinking and brothels.
Revised:  He also founded a temperance movement in Azumino, which drew the wrath of locals for its aggressive approach against drinking and brothels.
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Original: John Gachora is an electrical engineer and bank executive in Kenya, the largest economy in East Africa .
Revised: John Gachora is an electrical engineer and bank executive in Kenya, the largest economy in the East African Community .
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Original:  He is the current Group Managing Director and Group Chief Executive Officer of NIC Bank Group, a banking conglomerate, with subsidiaries in Kenya, Tanzania  and Uganda.
Revised:  He is the Group Managing Director and Group Chief Executive Officer of NIC Bank Group, a banking conglomerate, with subsidiaries in Kenya, Tanzania and Uganda.
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Original:  He is the current Group Managing Director and Group Chief Executive Officer of NIC Bank Group, a banking conglomerate, with subsidiaries in Kenya, Tanzania  and Uganda.
Revised:  He is the current Group Managing Director and Group Chief Executive Officer of NIC Bank Group, a banking conglomerate, with subsidiaries in Kenya, Tanzania , and Uganda.
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Original:  Background and education Gachora was born in Gatamaiyu Village , in Kenya's Central Province , to subsistence farmers in 1968, the eighth born in a family of thirteen siblings .
Revised:  Background and education Gachora was born in Gatamaiyu Village in Kenya's Central Province , to subsistence farmers in 1968, the eighth born in a family of thirteen siblings .
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Original:  Background and education Gachora was born in Gatamaiyu Village , in Kenya's Central Province , to subsistence farmers in 1968, the eighth born in a family of thirteen siblings .
Revised:  Background and education Gachora was born in Gatamaiyu Village , in Kenya's Central Province to subsistence farmers in 1968, the eighth born in a family of thirteen siblings .
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Original:  Later, in 2002, he would receive the Executive Master of Business Administration from the Wharton School of Business.
Revised:  Later, in 2002, he received the Executive Master of Business Administration from the Wharton School of Business.
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Original:  In January 2009  he joined Absa Capital in Johannesburg, South Africa, rising to the rank of Chief Executive Officer of Absa Africa at Absa Group Limited (now Barclays Africa Group), in November 2010.
Revised:  In January 2009 , he joined Absa Capital in Johannesburg, South Africa, rising to the rank of Chief Executive Officer of Absa Africa at Absa Group Limited (now Barclays Africa Group), in November 2010.
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Original:  Other considerations John Gachora is a married father of three children.
Revised:  Other considerations Gachora is a married father of three children.
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Original:  In January 2009, he joined Absa Capital in Johannesburg, South Africa, rising to the rank of Chief Executive Officer of Absa Africa at Absa Group Limited (now Barclays Africa Group) , in November 2010.
Revised:  In January 2009, he joined Absa Capital in Johannesburg, South Africa, rising to the rank of Chief Executive Officer of Absa Africa at Absa Group Limited , in November 2010.
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Original: The international community, leaded by Nigeria, tried to brought order to the expanding chaos in Chad through a series of international peace conferences.
Revised: The international community, led by Nigeria, tried to brought order to the expanding chaos in Chad through a series of international peace conferences.
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Original:  and when Baghlani died in a car accident in Benghazi on March 27, Acyl became the new leader of the militia with the full support of the Libyan president Muammar al-Gaddafi, of whom Acyl was to become his most loyal man in Chad.
Revised:  and when Baghlani died in a car accident in Benghazi on March 27, Acyl became the new leader of the militia with the full support of the Libyan leader Muammar al-Gaddafi, of whom Acyl was to become his most loyal man in Chad.
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