wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  "We object to this  and we object to other Israeli practices in Jerusalem related to housing, including the continuing pattern of evictions and demolition of Palestinian homes , " said spokesman Ian Kelly.
Revised:  "We object to this and we object to other Israeli practices in Jerusalem related to housing, including the continuing pattern of evictions and demolition of Palestinian homes , " 
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Original:  The British consulate in Jerusalem issued a statement adding Foreign Secretary David Miliband 's disapproval.
Revised:  The British consulate in Jerusalem issued a statement on behalf of Foreign Secretary David Miliband 's disapproval.
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Original:  The British consulate in Jerusalem issued a statement adding Foreign Secretary David Miliband 's disapproval.
Revised:  The British consulate in Jerusalem issued a statement adding Foreign Secretary David Miliband that read,
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Original:  So this decision on Gilo is wrong and we oppose it , " it said.
Revised:  So this decision on Gilo is wrong and we oppose it . " it said.
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Original:  So this decision on Gilo is wrong and we oppose it , " it said.
Revised:  So this decision on Gilo is wrong and we oppose it , " 
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Original: ] is willing to adopt the policy of the greatest possible restraint concerning growth in the West Bank, but this applies to the West Bank," said the Prime Minister's spokesman Mark Regev.
Revised: ] is willing to adopt the policy of the greatest possible restraint concerning growth in the West Bank, but this applies to the West Bank," said the Prime Minister's spokesperson Mark Regev.
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Original:  Its leader Mahmud Abbas said that the breakdown in talks left him with no choice but to seek international recognition of a Palestinian state unilaterally, despite requests from the United states and the European Union to resume peace talks.
Revised:  President Mahmud Abbas said that the breakdown in talks left him with no choice but to seek international recognition of a Palestinian state unilaterally, despite requests from the United states and the European Union to resume peace talks.
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Original:  Its leader Mahmud Abbas said that the breakdown in talks left him with no choice but to seek international recognition of a Palestinian state unilaterally, despite requests from the United states and the European Union to resume peace talks.
Revised:  Its leader Mahmud Abbas said that the breakdown in talks left him with no choice but to seek international recognition of a Palestinian state unilaterally, despite requests from the United States and the European Union to resume peace talks.
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Original:  External Links Broad Street It appears that this was a hoax, unconfirmed reports on Australian Teleivision have reported that this evacuation was caused by a hoax
Revised:  External Links Broad Stree
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Original:  The package included a quota of 1 Gigaoctet per month, which correspond to moderate usage (reception of simple emails for example).
Revised:  The package 's quota corresponds to moderate usage (reception of simple emails for example).
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Original: |Examples of 3G-enabled mobile telephonesIn a third case of staggering sums billed for "unlimited" internet access to come to light in a week, an emergency room doctor from Fontainebleau , France has beaten all records : €159,212 (US$237,417) , for one month's connection using an unlimited 3G dongle with Orange.
Revised: |Examples of 3G-enabled mobile phones. In a third case of staggering sums billed for "unlimited" internet access to come to light in a week, an emergency room doctor from Fontainebleau , France has beaten all records : €159,212 (US$237,417) , for one month's connection using an unlimited 3G dongle with Orange.
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Original: |Examples of 3G-enabled mobile telephonesIn a third case of staggering sums billed for "unlimited" internet access to come to light in a week, an emergency room doctor from Fontainebleau , France has beaten all records : €159,212 (US$237,417) , for one month's connection using an unlimited 3G dongle with Orange.
Revised: |Examples of 3G-enabled mobile telephonesIn a third case of staggering sums billed for "unlimited" Internet access this week, a French emergency-room doctor from Fontainebleau , France has beaten all records : €159,212 (US$237,417) , for one month's connection using an unlimited 3G dongle with Orange.
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Original: |Examples of 3G-enabled mobile telephonesIn a third case of staggering sums billed for "unlimited" internet access to come to light in a week, an emergency room doctor from Fontainebleau , France has beaten all records : €159,212 (US$237,417) , for one month's connection using an unlimited 3G dongle with Orange.
Revised: |Examples of 3G-enabled mobile telephonesIn a third case of staggering sums billed for "unlimited" internet access to come to light in a week, an emergency room doctor from Fontainebleau beats all records with a €159,212 (US$237,417) , for one month's connection using an unlimited 3G dongle with Orange.
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Original: |Examples of 3G-enabled mobile telephonesIn a third case of staggering sums billed for "unlimited" internet access to come to light in a week, an emergency room doctor from Fontainebleau , France has beaten all records : €159,212 (US$237,417) , for one month's connection using an unlimited 3G dongle with Orange.
Revised: |Examples of 3G-enabled mobile telephonesIn a third case of staggering sums billed for "unlimited" internet access to come to light in a week, an emergency room doctor from Fontainebleau , France has beaten all records : €159,212 (US$237,417) , for one month's use of an unlimited 3G dongle with Orange.
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Original:  For the last six months he has been battling to resolve the nightmare of the astronomical bill . "To begin with I thought it was a joke", said Jean Spadaro, confirming a story from l'Observateur du Valenciennois .
Revised:  For the last six months he has been battling to resolve the nightmare of the astronomical bill . "To begin with I thought it was a joke", said Spadaro, confirming a story from l'Observateur du Valenciennois .
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Original:  The very same newspaper already revealed last week a similar misadventure experienced by Eric Gernez, a café owner in Petite-Forêt near to Valenciennes  who received a bill for €45,000.
Revised:  The very same newspaper already revealed last week a similar case — Eric Gernez, a café owner in Petite-Forêt near to Valenciennes who received a bill for €45,000.
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Original:  The very same newspaper already revealed last week a similar misadventure experienced by Eric Gernez, a café owner in Petite-Forêt near to Valenciennes  who received a bill for €45,000.
Revised:  The very same newspaper already revealed last week a similar misadventure experienced by Eric Gernez, a café owner in Petite-Forêt near to Valenciennes — who received a bill for €45,000.
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Original:  Christophe Aupy-Fargues, head of an insurance brokerage firm in Saint-Herblain, west of Nantes and also subscribed to the unlimited 3G dongle  , confirmed to Ouest-France on Monday having blocked the payment of a bill for €39,500 demanded by Orange.
Revised:  Christophe Aupy-Fargues, head of an insurance brokerage firm in Saint-Herblain, west of Nantes , and another unlimited 3G dongle , confirmed to Ouest-France on Monday having blocked the payment of a bill for €39,500 demanded by Orange.
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Original:  Christophe Aupy-Fargues, head of an insurance brokerage firm in Saint-Herblain, west of Nantes and also subscribed to the unlimited 3G dongle  , confirmed to Ouest-France on Monday having blocked the payment of a bill for €39,500 demanded by Orange.
Revised:  Christophe Aupy-Fargues, head of an insurance brokerage firm in Saint-Herblain, west of Nantes and also subscribed to the unlimited 3G dongle , confirmed to Ouest-France on Monday the blocking of payment on a bill for €39,500 demanded by Orange.
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Original:  "I subscribed in November 2008 to a basic internet access by 3G dongle at €30 per month " but " seeing my bills reach sums going up to €860 in April, I decided in May to subscribe to an unlimited acess by 3G dongle with Orange business at €50 per month.
Revised:  "I subscribed in November 2008 to a basic internet access by 3G dongle at €30 per month ... seeing my bills reach sums going up to €860 in April, I decided in May to subscribe to an unlimited acess by 3G dongle with Orange business at €50 per month.
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Original:  "I subscribed in November 2008 to a basic internet access by 3G dongle at €30 per month " but " seeing my bills reach sums going up to €860 in April, I decided in May to subscribe to an unlimited acess by 3G dongle with Orange business at €50 per month.
Revised:  "I subscribed in November 2008 to a basic internet access by 3G dongle at €30 per month " but " seeing my bills reach sums going up to €860 in April, I decided in May to subscribe to unlimited access by 3G dongle with Orange business at €50 per month.
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Original:  When I saw my bill for May, I couldn't believe my eyes: €159,212, for one month's connection, it's impossible, especially as we don't use it all of the time" added this father of two children, aged 16 and 19.
Revised:  When I saw my bill for May, I couldn't believe my eyes: €159,212, for one month's connection, it's impossible, especially as we don't use it all of the time" added this father of two children, aged sixteen and nineteen.
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Original:  Upon opening the envelope in June, he therefore expected to read an amount neighbouring the cost of his subscription .
Revised:  On opening the envelope in June, he therefore expected to read an amount neighbouring the cost of his subscription .
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Original:  Upon opening the envelope in June, he therefore expected to read an amount neighbouring the cost of his subscription .
Revised:  Upon opening the envelope in June, he expected to read an amount neighbouring the cost of his subscription .
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Original:  But to his horror  it was €159, 212.
Revised:  But to his horror , it was €159, 212.
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Original:  A sum, despite comfortably earning his living, sufficient to make an emergency doctor's head spin.
Revised:  A sum, despite comfortably earning his living, sufficient to make an emergency-room doctor's head spin.
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Original:  According to the doctor, France Télécom (Orange's parent company) never explained to him that the "unlimited" package only related to the time spent surfing on the internet, but not the volume of traffic , limited to 1 Gigaoctet per month.
Revised:  Spadaro claims France Télécom (Orange's parent company) never explained to him that the "unlimited" package only related to the time spent surfing on the internet, but not the volume of traffic , limited to 1 Gigaoctet per month.
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Original:  According to the doctor, France Télécom (Orange's parent company) never explained to him that the "unlimited" package only related to the time spent surfing on the internet, but not the volume of traffic , limited to 1 Gigaoctet per month.
Revised:  According to the doctor, France Télécom (Orange's parent company) never explained to him that the "unlimited" package only related to the time spent surfing on the Internet — not the volume of traffic , limited to 1 Gigaoctet per month.
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Original:  According to the doctor, France Télécom (Orange's parent company) never explained to him that the "unlimited" package only related to the time spent surfing on the internet, but not the volume of traffic , limited to 1 Gigaoctet per month.
Revised:  According to the doctor, France Télécom (Orange's parent company) never explained to him that the "unlimited" package only related to the time spent surfing on the internet, but not the volume of traffic — limited to one Gigaoctet per month.
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Original:  Whereas, as good internet users, the members of the Spadaro family surfed Facebook, YouTube, sent emails with attachments, received them, etc  .
Revised:  Whereas, as good internet users, the members of the Spadaro family surfed Facebook, YouTube, sent emails with attachments, received same, .
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Original:  €0.17 per Megabyte . €170 per Gigabyte.
Revised:  €0.17 per Megabyte , or €170 per Gigabyte.
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Original:  However, until the bills arrived, the Spadaro family were using the internet in blissful ignorance .
Revised:  Until the bills arrived, the Spadaro family were using the internet in blissful ignorance .
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Original:  The doctor also says , with evidence of his letters in hand, that he had increased the number of protest actions and had receivedin response "warnings with threats of seizure".
Revised:  Spadaro also claims , with evidence of his letters in hand, that he had increased the number of protest actions and had receivedin response "warnings with threats of seizure".
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Original:  The doctor also says , with evidence of his letters in hand, that he had increased the number of protest actions and had receivedin response "warnings with threats of seizure".
Revised:  The doctor also says , with evidence of his letters in hand, he had increased the number of protest actions and had receivedin response "warnings with threats of seizure".
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Original:  The doctor also says , with evidence of his letters in hand, that he had increased the number of protest actions and had receivedin response "warnings with threats of seizure".
Revised:  The doctor also says , with evidence of his letters in hand, that he had increased the number of protest actions and received, in response, "warnings with threats of seizure".
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Original:  However this resolution does not satisfy Jean Spadaro at all, who simply wishes that the bill be cancelled.
Revised:  This resolution does not satisfy Jean Spadaro at all, who simply wishes that the bill be cancelled.
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Original:  It's a question of principles", says the doctor, who highlights that "on forums, dozens of subscribers tell similar stories".
Revised:  It's a question of principles", he says, highlighting that "on forums, dozens of subscribers tell similar stories".
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Original:  Thoroughly exasperated by the whole affair, Jean Spadaro is awaiting the end of his current contract with Orange on February 21, 2010.
Revised:  Exasperated by the whole affair, Jean Spadaro is awaiting the end of his current contract with Orange on February 21, 2010.
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Original:  Thoroughly exasperated by the whole affair, Jean Spadaro is awaiting the end of his current contract with Orange on February 21, 2010.
Revised:  Thoroughly exasperated by the whole affair, Spadaro awaits the end of his current contract with Orange on February 21, 2010.
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Original:  Despite being contacted , France Télécom had not replied by the end of Tuesday evening
Revised:  At time of publication , France Télécom had not replied by the end of Tuesday evening
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Original:  Despite being contacted , France Télécom had not replied by the end of Tuesday evening
Revised:  Despite being contacted , France Télécom have not responded to enquiries on this issue
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Original:  the wikt: beleaguered Dr Jean Spadaro has been battling this for six months.
Revised:  the beleaguered Dr Jean Spadaro has been battling this for six months.
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Original: Spadaro claims France Télécom (Orange's parent company) never explained to him that the "unlimited" package only related to the time spent surfing on the Internet — not the volume of traffic — limited to one Gigaoctet per month.
Revised: Spadaro claims France Télécom (Orange's parent company) never explained to him that the "unlimited" package only related to the time spent surfing on the Internet — not the volume of traffic — limited to one Gigabyte per month.
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Original: The Maersk Alabama, a US-flagged container ship that was hijacked by Somali pirates seven months ago, has been attacked again today off the coast of Somalia.
Revised: The Maersk Alabama, a US-flagged container ship that was hijacked by Somali pirates seven months ago, was attacked off the coast of Somalia.
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Original: File:LocationSomalia.svg|Somalia location in Africa The US Navy's 5th Fleet, based in Bahrain, reported that four pirates riding in a fast skiff came within 270 meters of the container ship.
Revised: The Maersk Alabama The US Navy's 5th Fleet, based in Bahrain, reported that four pirates riding in a fast skiff came within 270 meters of the container ship.
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Original:  The Seychelles also signed an agreement last week to allow European warships and military personnel to pursue pirates from the high seas into Seychellian waters and to use necessary force  
Revised:  The Seychelles also signed an agreement last week to allow European warships and military personnel to pursue pirates from the high seas into Seychellian waters and to use necessary force . 
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Original:  The Seychelles also signed an agreement last week to allow European warships and military personnel to pursue pirates from the high seas into Seychellian waters and to use necessary force  
Revised:  The Seychelles also signed an agreement last week to allow European warships and military personnel to pursue pirates from the high seas into Seychellian waters and to use necessary force H
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Original:  Anatoly Perminov, head for the Federal Space Agency Roscosmos, made the announcement today.
Revised:  Anatoly Perminov, head of the Federal Space Agency Roscosmos, made the announcement today.
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Original: Russian space officials have said that the launch of the new "Angara " carrier rocket might be delayed for about a year due to lack of funds.
Revised: Russian space officials have said that the launch of the new Angara carrier rocket might be delayed for about a year due to lack of funds.
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Original:  They will be used for both military and civilian purposes, and are to be used to joing space stations and launch satellites into orbit
Revised:  They will be used for both military and civilian purposes, and are to be used in joint space station projects and for launching satellites into orbit
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Original:  His died on Monday.
Revised:  He died on Monday.
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Original:  With the death of this soldier, the total number of military personnel that have been killed in Afghanistan since 2001 has now increased to 234.
Revised:  With the death of this soldier, the total number of military personnel that have been killed in Afghanistan since 2001 has increased to 234.
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Original:  Nicola, the wife of the bomb disposal expert has said: "Loren was Army-barmy right back to being a Cadet.
Revised:  Nicola, the wife of the bomb disposal expert , said: "Loren was Army-barmy right back to being a Cadet.
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Original:  Senator Xenophon, an independent politician from South Australia, also requested that police and the Australia parliament investigate whether or not Scientology should retain its tax-exempt status within the country.
Revised:  Senator Xenophon, an independent politician from South Australia, also requested that police and the Australian parliament investigate whether or not Scientology should retain its tax-exempt status within the country.
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Original:  Following a week of negotiations, Sweden's Prime Minister Fredrik Reinfeldt was attempting to find a compromise among the leaders of the EU's 27 member states, after division over candidates had previously failed to result in a unanimous decision .
Revised:  "Europe must be in every member state's advantage," he continued. "This cardinal principle leds me to a two-track approach. First of all, I will consider everyone's interests and sensitivities. Even if our unity is our strength, our diversity remains our wealth. Every country has its own history, its own culture, its own way of doing things. Our journey may be toward a common destination, but we will all bring along different luggage."
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Original:   Initially  former United Kingdom Prime Minister Tony Blair was a popular candidate for President.
Revised:  Initially , former United Kingdom Prime Minister Tony Blair was a popular candidate for President.
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Original: File:Herman Van Rompuy portrait.jpg| | File photo of Herman Van Rompuy.
Revised: File:Herman Van Rompuy portrait.jpg| File photo of Herman Van Rompuy.
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Original: Other teams that have qualified include The Netherlands, South Korea, Japan, Ghana, England, w: Spain, Côte d'Ivoire, w: Germany, Italy, Mexico, United States and Switzerland.
Revised: Other teams that have qualified include The Netherlands, South Korea, Japan, Ghana, England, Spain, Côte d'Ivoire, w: Germany, Italy, Mexico, United States and Switzerland.
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Original: Other teams that have qualified include The Netherlands, South Korea, Japan, Ghana, England, w: Spain, Côte d'Ivoire, w: Germany, Italy, Mexico, United States and Switzerland.
Revised: Other teams that have qualified include The Netherlands, South Korea, Japan, Ghana, England, w: Spain, Côte d'Ivoire, Germany, Italy, Mexico, United States and Switzerland.
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Original: Uruguay have qualified for the 2010 World Cup after a 1:1 draw with Costa Rica , Uruguay won on a 2:1 aggregate when they won 1:0 on Saturday.
Revised: Uruguay have qualified for the 2010 World Cup following a 1:1 draw with Costa Rica , Uruguay won on a 2:1 aggregate when they won 1:0 on Saturday.
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Original: Uruguay have qualified for the 2010 World Cup after a 1:1 draw with Costa Rica , Uruguay won on a 2:1 aggregate when they won 1:0 on Saturday.
Revised: Uruguay have qualified for the 2010 World Cup after a 1:1 draw with Costa Rica ; Uruguay won on a 2:1 aggregate when they won 1:0 on Saturday.
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Original:  On the same day Algeria, Greece, Slovenia, Portugal and France also qualified for the games .
Revised:  On the same day Algeria, Greece, Slovenia, Portugal and France also qualified for the tournament .
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Original:  Two time former winners Uruguay missed the 2006 World Cup after losing in a qualifier to Australia, who have also qualified for next year’s tournament.
Revised:  Two-time former winners Uruguay missed the 2006 World Cup after losing in a qualifier to Australia, who have also qualified for next year’s tournament.
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Original:  The host ’s South Africa are making their first appearance since 2002 along with Denmark, Nigeria, Cameroon and Slovenia.
Revised:  The host South Africa are making their first appearance since 2002 along with Denmark, Nigeria, Cameroon and Slovenia.
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Original:  Other teams that have qualified include The Netherlands, South Korea, Japan, Ghana, England, Spain, Côte d'Ivoire, Germany, Italy, Mexico,  United States and Switzerland.
Revised:  Other teams that have qualified include The Netherlands, South Korea, Japan, Ghana, England, Spain, Côte d'Ivoire, Germany, Italy, Mexico, the United States and Switzerland.
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Original:  The tournament is due to start in South Africa on the 11th of June , 2010 and last for one month
Revised:  The tournament is due to start in South Africa on the June 11 , 2010 and last for one month
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Original: The team is scheduled to play their opening game on the morning of June 30th against .
Revised: The team is scheduled to play their opening game on the morning of June 30 against .
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