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Original:  Sharaf formerly held a position as the .
Revised:  Sharaf formerly held the position as the .
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Original:  The Los Angeles Times reports that he departed from that position five years ago, during the aftermath of numerous train collisions , in which the Egyptian government was accused of carelessness.
Revised:  The Los Angeles Times reports that he departed from that position five years ago, during the aftermath of numerous train collisions in which the Egyptian government was accused of carelessness.
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Original:  Former Egyptian president Hosni Mubarak was given a by Egypt on Monday ;
Revised:  Former Egyptian president Hosni Mubarak was considered by Egypt on Monday ;
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Original:  According to , Mubarak is not in the good health and has yet to have been sighted or heard from in public since his resignation.
Revised:  According to , Mubarak is not in the good health and has yet been seen or heard from in public since his resignation.
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Original:  Despite  one of their aims being achieved , protesters intend to continue demonstrating with mass rallies on Friday because all their demands have yet to be met.
Revised:  Despite having achieved one of their aims being achieved , protesters intend to continue demonstrating with mass rallies on Friday because all their demands have yet to be met.
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Original:  Despite  one of their aims being achieved , protesters intend to continue demonstrating with mass rallies on Friday because all their demands have yet to be met.
Revised:  Despite one of their aims , protesters intend to continue demonstrating with mass rallies on Friday because all their demands have yet to be met.
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Original:  The law allows the Egyptian government to place people under arrest with no charges brought against them.
Revised:  The law allows the Egyptian government to place people under arrest with out charges brought against them.
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Original:  The law allows the Egyptian government to place people under arrest with out charges brought against them.
Revised:  The law allows the Egyptian government to place people under arrest without charges brought against them.
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Original: In an 8 to 1 decision, the Court upheld a lower court's ruling that struck down an award of $5 million to a slain solder 's father, Albert Snyder.
Revised: In an 8 to 1 decision, the Court upheld a lower court's ruling that struck down an award of $5 million to a slain soldier 's father, Albert Snyder.
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Original:   The protest was well publicized, a was called, and the funeral possession was diverted away from the protesters, who carried signs such as "Thank God for Dead Soldiers," "God Hates Fags" and "America Is Doomed."
Revised:  Pastor The protest was well publicized, a was called, and the funeral possession was diverted away from the protesters, who carried signs such as "Thank God for Dead Soldiers," "God Hates Fags" and "America Is Doomed."
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Original:  Pastor The protest was well publicized, a was called, and the funeral possession was diverted away from the protesters, who carried signs such as "Thank God for Dead Soldiers," "God Hates Fags" and "America Is Doomed."
Revised:  Pastor The protest was well publicized, a was called, and the funeral procession was diverted away from the protesters, who carried signs such as "Thank God for Dead Soldiers," "God Hates Fags" and "America Is Doomed."
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Original:  Matthew Snyder who was killed  Iraq in 2006.
Revised:  Matthew Snyder who was killed in Iraq in 2006.
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Original:  Lomell was awarded with the Distinguished Service Cross for his actions on June 6th, 1944, also known as D-Day.
Revised:  Lomell was awarded the Distinguished Service Cross for his actions on June 6th, 1944, also known as D-Day.
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Original:  As a platoon leader in the US Army's 2nd Ranger Battalion  Lomell and other men climbed a 100ft cliff to destroy German artillery.
Revised:  As a platoon leader in the US Army's 2nd Ranger Battalion , Lomell and other men climbed a 100ft cliff to destroy German artillery.
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Original:  J. Mark Mutter, a historian from Lomell's hometown of Toms River said "He was one of the greatest men of the greatest generation.
Revised:  J. Mark Mutter, a historian from Lomell's hometown of Toms River , said, "He was one of the greatest men of the greatest generation.
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Original:  In order to get to the guns they would have to climb up a 100ft cliff with covering fire from troops based on the ground for protection.
Revised:  To get to the guns they would have to climb up a 100ft cliff with covering fire from troops based on the ground for protection.
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Original:  In order to get to the guns they would have to climb up a 100ft cliff with covering fire from troops based on the ground for protection.
Revised:  In order to get to the guns they had to climb up a 100ft cliff with covering fire from troops based on the ground for protection.
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Original:  Many of Lomells men were either shot and killed or fell to their deaths.
Revised:  Many of Lomell's men were either shot and killed or fell to their deaths.
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Original:  After Lomell and others had reached the top of the cliff and thought back the Germans  it became clear that the artillery was not were it was previously belived to be.
Revised:  After Lomell and others reached the top of the cliff and thought back the Germans it became clear that the artillery was not were it was previously belived to be.
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Original:  After Lomell and others had reached the top of the cliff and thought back the Germans  it became clear that the artillery was not were it was previously belived to be.
Revised:  After Lomell and others had reached the top of the cliff and fought back the Germans it became clear that the artillery was not were it was previously belived to be.
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Original:  After Lomell and others had reached the top of the cliff and thought back the Germans  it became clear that the artillery was not were it was previously belived to be.
Revised:  After Lomell and others had reached the top of the cliff and thought back the Germans , it became clear that the artillery was not were it was previously belived to be.
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Original:  After Lomell and others had reached the top of the cliff and thought back the Germans  it became clear that the artillery was not were it was previously belived to be.
Revised:  After Lomell and others had reached the top of the cliff and thought back the Germans it became clear that the artillery was not where it was previously belived to be.
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Original:  After Lomell and others had reached the top of the cliff and thought back the Germans  it became clear that the artillery was not were it was previously belived to be.
Revised:  After Lomell and others had reached the top of the cliff and thought back the Germans it became clear that the artillery was not were it was previously believed to be.
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Original:  For his actions historian Stephen Ambrose said that  other than future U.S President Dwight D. Eisenhower, Lomell was the one single individual for the sucess of D-Day.
Revised:  For his actions historian Stephen Ambrose said that , other than future U.S President Dwight D. Eisenhower, Lomell was the one single individual for the sucess of D-Day.
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Original:  For his actions historian Stephen Ambrose said that  other than future U.S President Dwight D. Eisenhower, Lomell was the one single individual for the sucess of D-Day.
Revised:  For his actions historian Stephen Ambrose said that other than future U.S President Dwight D. Eisenhower, Lomell was the one individual reponsible for the success of D-Day.
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Original:  Funeral arrangments are being planned and have not yet been released
Revised:  Funeral arrangements are being planned and have not yet been released
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Original:  To get to the guns they had to climb up a 100ft cliff  with covering fire from troops based on the ground for protection.
Revised:  To get to the guns they had to climb up a 100ft cliff , with covering fire from troops based on the ground for protection.
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Original:  For his actions historian Stephen Ambrose said that, other than future U.S President Dwight D. Eisenhower, Lomell was the one individual reponsible for the success of D-Day.
Revised:  For his actions historian Stephen Ambrose said that, other than future U.S President Dwight D. Eisenhower, Lomell was the one individual most responsible for the success of D-Day.
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Original:  As a platoon leader in the US Army's 2nd Ranger Battalion, Lomell and other men climbed a 100ft cliff to destroy German artillery.
Revised:  As a platoon leader in the US Army's 2nd Ranger Battalion, Lomell and other men climbed sheer cliffs to destroy German artillery.
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Original:  To get to the guns they had to climb up a 100ft cliff , with covering fire from troops based on the ground for protection.
Revised:  To get to the guns they had to climb up 100-foot cliffs , with covering fire from troops based on the ground for protection.
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Original: Lomell as a Second Lieutenant Former American solider and World War II veteran Leonard Lomell has died at the age of 91.
Revised: Lomell as a Second Lieutenant Former American solider and World War II veteran Leonard Lomell died yesterday at the age of 91.
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Original:  However, Lomell's heroics were greatly overshadowed by private Bradley Manning, who is forced to sleep naked on a stone floor for his anti-war efforts.
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Original: Lomell as a Second Lieutenant Former United States soldier and World War II veteran Leonard Lomell died on Tuesday at the age of 91, his family revealed on Thursday.
Revised: Lomell as a Second Lieutenant Former United States soldier and World War II veteran died on Tuesday at the age of 91, his family revealed on Thursday.
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Original:  J. Mark Mutter, a historian from Lomell's hometown of Toms River , said, "He was one of the greatest men of the greatest generation.
Revised:  J. Mark Mutter, a historian from Lomell's hometown of , said, "He was one of the greatest men of the greatest generation.
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Original:  Lomell was in charge of his platoon when they were set the task of destroying five German coastal guns based at the top of Pointe du Hoc between two of the landing beaches.
Revised:  Lomell was in charge of his platoon when they were set the task of destroying five German coastal guns based at the top of between two of the landing beaches.
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Original:  For his actions historian Stephen Ambrose said that, other than future U.S President Dwight D. Eisenhower , Lomell was the one individual most responsible for the success of D-Day.
Revised:  For his actions historian said that, other than future U.S President Dwight D. Eisenhower , Lomell was the one individual most responsible for the success of D-Day.
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Original:  For his actions historian Stephen Ambrose said that, other than future U.S President Dwight D. Eisenhower , Lomell was the one individual most responsible for the success of D-Day.
Revised:  For his actions historian Stephen Ambrose said that, other than future U.S President , Lomell was the one individual most responsible for the success of D-Day.
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Original: Azcona was at the presidental office of Hondulas from 1986 to 1990 and known as US goverment ally.
Revised: Azcona was President of Honduras from 1986 to 1990 and known as US goverment ally.
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Original: Azcona was at the presidental office of Hondulas from 1986 to 1990 and known as US goverment ally.
Revised: Azcona was at the presidental office of Hondulas from 1986 to 1990 and well-known as US government ally.
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Original:  Once he requested the US goverment to send army against Nicaragua army which crossed the border to follow the Contra which had their base in Honduras.
Revised:  Once he requested the US goverment to send army against Nicaragua army which crossed the border to follow the Contras based in Honduras.
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Original:  Despite of corruptive tendency in his country , Azcona was known one of clean politicians accoring to Reuters
Revised:  Despite his country's reputation for a high level of corruption , Azcona was known one of clean politicians accoring to Reuters
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Original:  Despite of corruptive tendency in his country , Azcona was known one of clean politicians accoring to Reuters
Revised:  Despite of corruptive tendency in his country , Azcona was known one of cleanest politicians according to Reuters
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Original:  He has also come under criticism for planning to introduce the laws on Melbourne Cup Day, a day when most Australian’s will being paying attention to a Horse Race, and not poltics .
Revised:  He has also come under criticism for planning to introduce the laws on Melbourne Cup Day, a day when most Australian’s will being paying attention to a Horse Race, and not politics .
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Original:  Neil James from the Australia Defense Association says that the legal precedents recognized during World War I and World War II would indicate that most of the reasonably contentious provisions would be w:constitutional| constitutional .
Revised:  Neil James from the Australia Defense Association says that the legal precedents recognized during World War I and World War II would indicate that most of the reasonably contentious provisions would be constitutional .
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Original:  He has also come under criticism for planning to introduce the laws on Melbourne Cup Day, a day when most Australian’s will being paying attention to a Horse Race, and not politics.
Revised:  He has also come under criticism for planning to introduce the laws on Melbourne Cup Day, a day when most Australian’s will be paying attention to a Horse Race, and not politics.
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Original: However, Farid Ayar of the Independent Electoral Commission of Iraq said ;
Revised: However, Farid Ayar of Iraq's Independent Electoral Commission of Iraq said ;
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Original:   Sunni sects account for nearly 20 \% of the country’s population.
Revised:  Sunni sects account for nearly 20 percent of the country’s population.
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Original:   However, Farid Ayar of Iraq's Independent Electoral Commission said before reading the  vote outcome that, "Whatever the results of the referendum are ... it is a civilized step that aims to put Iraq on the path of true democracy."
Revised:  However, Farid Ayar of Iraq's Independent Electoral Commission said before reading the official vote outcome that, "Whatever the results of the referendum are ... it is a civilized step that aims to put Iraq on the path of true democracy."
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Original:  Iraq officials reported that 96 percent of voters in the predominately Sunni province of al-Anbar and 81 percent of voters in Salaheddin province rejected the constitution  .
Revised:  Iraq officials reported that 97 percent of voters in the predominately Sunni province of al-Anbar and 81 percent of voters in Salaheddin province rejected the constitution .
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Original:  Iraq officials reported that 96 percent of voters in the predominately Sunni province of al-Anbar and 81 percent of voters in Salaheddin province rejected the constitution  .
Revised:  Iraq officials reported that 96 percent of voters in the predominately Sunni province of al-Anbar and 82 percent of voters in Salaheddin province rejected the constitution .
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Original: According to the Libyan government, the crew, consisting of two men and one woman, entered Libyan airspace "in breach of international law." State TV , owned and operated by the government, says their mission was to evacuate and drop off spies.
Revised: According to the Libyan government, the crew, consisting of two men and one woman, entered Libyan airspace "in breach of international law." Libyan state TV says their mission was to evacuate and drop off spies.
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Original: According to the Libyan government, the crew, consisting of two men and one woman, entered Libyan airspace "in breach of international law." Libyan state TV says their mission was to evacuate and drop off spies.
Revised: According to the Libyan government, the crew, consisting of two men and one woman, entered Libyan airspace "in breach of international law." Libyan state TV says their mission was to evacuate or drop off spies.
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Original:  The report added that there was "an international conspiracy" against the Libyan government and Gaddafi.
Revised:  The report added that there was "an international conspiracy" against Libya and Gaddafi.
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Original:  He added that there are "intensive diplomatic talks" between the two governments to negotiate the release of the crew.
Revised:  The ministray said there are "intensive diplomatic talks" between the two governments to negotiate the release of the crew.
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Original:  The ministray said there are "intensive diplomatic talks" between the two governments to negotiate the release of the crew.
Revised:  The ministry said there are "intensive diplomatic talks" between the two governments to negotiate the release of the crew.
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Original:  No further information has been released due to the "interests of the safety of the crew," said Hans Hillen, the Dutch defense minister.
Revised:  Very little information has been released due to the "interests of the safety of the crew," said Hans Hillen, the Dutch defense minister.
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Original: According to the Libyan government, the crew, consisting of two men and one woman, entered Libyan airspace "in breach of international law." Libyan state TV says their mission was to evacuate or drop off spies.
Revised: According to the Libyan government, the crew, consisting of two men and a woman, entered Libyan airspace "in breach of international law." Libyan state TV says their mission was to evacuate or drop off spies.
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Original:  Libyan State TV aired footage, reportedly of the three crew members, along with weapons and  a helicopter.
Revised:  Libyan State TV aired footage, reportedly of the three crew members, along with weapons and , and a helicopter.
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Original:  The footage then shows the three crew members inside a building surrounded by plain clothed and uniformed security personnel, answering questions and drinking a beverage.
Revised:  The footage then shows the three crew members inside a building surrounded by plain clothed and uniformed personnel, answering questions and drinking a beverage.
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Original:  State TV then shows what is reportedly a machine gun with live ammunition on the side of the helicopter . Guns and were also allegedly confiscated .
Revised:  State TV then shows what is reportedly a machine gun with live ammunition on the side of the helicopter .
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Original:  Armed men can be seen dancing around the helicopter, apparently celebrating its capture.
Revised:  Armed men can be seen around the helicopter, apparently celebrating its capture.
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Original:  The footage then shows the three crew members inside a building surrounded by plain clothed and uniformed personnel, answering questions and drinking a beverage .
Revised:  The footage then shows the three crew members inside a building surrounded by plain clothed and uniformed personnel, drinking a beverage .
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Original: The papers took the image off their sites within hours after being warned of the risk they would prejudice Ward's right to a fair trial by influencing jurors .
Revised: The papers took the image off their sites within hours , after being ordered to do so .
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Original:  The case is thought to be a regarding Internet news sites .
Revised:  The case is thought to be a regarding Internet publishing .
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Original: 150px|The Royal Courts of Justice, where the High Court sits in London and heard the case aginst the tabloids and — that are the most-read papers in the UK — have been found to be in by the in London for publishing a photo of a defendant with a gun .
Revised: 150px|The Royal Courts of Justice, where the High Court sits in London and heard the case aginst the tabloids and — that are the most-read papers in the UK — have been found to be in by the in London .
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Original:  Trial Judge Michael Murphy QC, who had previously ordered the jury not to consult the Internet, did not halt the prosecution as he felt "satisfied" the jury hadn't seen the picture.
Revised:  The trial judge, His Honour Judge Michael Murphy QC, who had previously ordered the jury not to consult the Internet, did not halt the prosecution as he felt "satisfied" the jury hadn't seen the picture.
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Original:  Attorney General Dominic Grieve brought the action against the papers High Court Justices Moses and Owen Thursday sided with Grieve and McCullough: "We conclude that the nature of the photograph created a substantial risk of prejudicing any juror who saw that photograph against the defendant Ward."
Revised:  Attorney General Dominic Grieve brought the action against the papers High Court judges Mr Justice Moses and Mr Justice Owen Thursday sided with Grieve and McCullough: "We conclude that the nature of the photograph created a substantial risk of prejudicing any juror who saw that photograph against the defendant Ward."
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Original:   Justice Moses' judgment mentioned the significance of the case in regards to online publications: "The criminal courts have been troubled by the dangers to the integrity and fairness of a criminal trial, where juries can obtain such easy access to the internet and to other forms of instant communication.
Revised:  Mr Justice Moses' judgment mentioned the significance of the case in regards to online publications: "The criminal courts have been troubled by the dangers to the integrity and fairness of a criminal trial, where juries can obtain such easy access to the internet and to other forms of instant communication.
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Original: 150px|The Royal Courts of Justice, where the High Court sits in London and heard the case aginst the tabloids and — that are the most-read papers in the UK — have been found to be in by the in London.
Revised: 150px|The Royal Courts of Justice, where the High Court sits in London and heard the case against the tabloids and — that are the most-read papers in the UK — have been found to be in by the in London.
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Original: The Daily Mail's website covered the ruling , in an article in which they also offered an explanation for how they published the photograph.
Revised: The Daily Mail's website covered the ruling in an article in which they also offered an explanation for how they published the photograph.
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Original:  As Leonard lay motionless on his back, the stunned audience became silent.
Revised:  As Leonard lay motionless on his back, the audience became silent.
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Original:  A witness on the court said Leonard had ceased to breath and his heart had stopped.
Revised:  A witness on the court said Leonard had ceased to breathe and his heart had stopped.
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Original:   Leonard’s death has shocked the community.
Revised:  Leonard’s death as shocking the community.
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Original:  Lahiri said many doctors are encouraging schools to make extensive testing of the heart routine for physicals given  school athletes.
Revised:  Lahiri said many doctors are encouraging schools to make extensive testing of the heart routine for physicals given to school athletes.
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