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Original: A member of poverty and injustice problems confederation Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented in a talk with BBC in a justificatory spirit, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
Revised: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented in a talk with BBC in a justificatory spirit, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
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Original: A member of poverty and injustice problems confederation Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented in a talk with BBC in a justificatory spirit, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
Revised: A member of poverty and injustice problems confederation Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC in a justificatory spirit, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
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Original: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC in a justificatory spirit , speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
Revised: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC , speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
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Original:  After  Danish unofficial draft version of the future treaty leaked, they reacted with a demand of shift of emission cuts to developed world industries.
Revised:  After a Danish unofficial draft version of the future treaty leaked, they reacted with a demand of shift of emission cuts to developed world industries.
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Original:  In  interview with Politiken  Danish daily broadsheet newspaper,  Chairman of Group of 77 commented on the event, mentioning the previous Denmark-Africa friendly political relations: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
Revised:  In an interview with Politiken Danish daily broadsheet newspaper, Chairman of Group of 77 commented on the event, mentioning the previous Denmark-Africa friendly political relations: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
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Original:  In  interview with Politiken  Danish daily broadsheet newspaper,  Chairman of Group of 77 commented on the event, mentioning the previous Denmark-Africa friendly political relations: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
Revised:  In interview with Politiken , a Danish daily broadsheet newspaper, Chairman of Group of 77 commented on the event, mentioning the previous Denmark-Africa friendly political relations: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
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Original:  In  interview with Politiken  Danish daily broadsheet newspaper,  Chairman of Group of 77 commented on the event, mentioning the previous Denmark-Africa friendly political relations: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
Revised:  In interview with Politiken Danish daily broadsheet newspaper, the Chairman of Group of 77 commented on the event, mentioning the previous Denmark-Africa friendly political relations: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
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Original:  In  interview with Politiken  Danish daily broadsheet newspaper,  Chairman of Group of 77 commented on the event, mentioning the previous Denmark-Africa friendly political relations: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries - to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
Revised:  In interview with Politiken Danish daily broadsheet newspaper, Chairman of Group of 77 commented on the event, mentioning the previous Denmark-Africa friendly political relations: A member of poverty-focussed charity, Oxfam, Antonio Hill commented to the BBC, speaking positively about the idea of transferring finance from industrialised to developing countries — to help them curb their emissions and help them protect against the impacts of climate change.
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Original:  The proposals, which require the approval of the university's governing authorities, would allow votes to be cast online , or in person over a number of days.
Revised:  The proposals, which require the approval of the university's governing authorities, would allow votes to be cast online or in person over a number of days.
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Original:  The hope is that overall turnout will improve: about 300,000 people were eligible to vote in the last election for the position , as graduates or academics of the university, but less than 500 did.
Revised:  The hope is that overall turnout will improve: about 300,000 people were eligible to vote in the last election for the position as they were graduates or academics of the university, but less than 500 did.
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Original:  Although the university has said that it wants to make the election "more accessible", concern has been expressed that the changes will make the process worse.
Revised:  Although the university has said that it wants to make the election "more accessible", there are concerns that the changes will make the process worse.
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Original:  She added that many poets in the past have refused to consider running , and said that these reforms would "probably increase the number of good candidates ruling themselves out."
Revised:  She added that many poets in the past have refused to consider running and said that these reforms would "probably increase the number of good candidates ruling themselves out."
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Original:  The professor has to give three lectures during the year and , every other year , to deliver a speech giving thanks to benefactors at the ceremony for the presentation of honorary degrees.
Revised:  The professor has to give three lectures during the year and to deliver every other year , to deliver a speech giving thanks to benefactors at the ceremony for the presentation of honorary degrees.
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Original:  The professor has to give three lectures during the year and , every other year , to deliver a speech giving thanks to benefactors at the ceremony for the presentation of honorary degrees.
Revised:  The professor has to give three lectures during the year and , every other year a speech giving thanks to benefactors at the ceremony for the presentation of honorary degrees.
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Original:  The professor has to give three lectures during the year and , every other year , to deliver a speech giving thanks to benefactors at the ceremony for the presentation of honorary degrees.
Revised:  The professor has to give three lectures during the year and , every other year , to deliver a speech giving thanks to benefactors during the ceremony for the presentation of honorary degrees.
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Original:  But local media reports say Kurdish groups objected to the March 6 date because it coincides with the anniversary of the 1975 Algiers Agreement between Iran and Iraq.
Revised:  However, local media reports say Kurdish groups objected to the March 6 date because it coincides with the anniversary of the 1975 Algiers Agreement between Iran and Iraq.
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Original:  ]  The legislature is investigating the bailout and the possible roles played by Vice President Boediono and Finance Minister Sri Mulyani in orchestrating a deal.
Revised:  ...] The legislature is investigating the bailout and the possible roles played by Vice President Boediono and Finance Minister Sri Mulyani in orchestrating a deal.
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Original:  We just want to send a message to our fellow countrymen [...] that justice cannot be served while corruption is still rampant in our country . " said the organiser of the demonstration, Usman Hamid, as quoted by the Al Jazeera news agency.
Revised:  We just want to send a message to our fellow countrymen [...] that justice cannot be served while corruption is still rampant in our country , " said the organiser of the demonstration, Usman Hamid, as quoted by the Al Jazeera news agency.
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Original:  The contest is known as the Eddie Aikau competition, named after a noted Hawaiin surfer who was lost at sea during the 1970s.
Revised:  The contest is known as the Eddie Aikau competition, named after a noted Hawaiian surfer who was lost at sea during the 1970s.
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Original:  Thousands of spectators from across the state gathered to watch 28 expert surfers tackle the 40-foot waves.
Revised:  Tens of thousands of spectators from across the state gathered to watch 28 expert surfers tackle the 40-foot waves.
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Original:  He added, "This is like a natural arena out here for this and it's amazing to be a part of it.  
Revised:  He added, "This is like a natural arena out here for this and it's amazing to be a part of it. " 
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Original: Massive waves pounded the North Shore of Oahu, Hawaii Tuesday, allowing for a rare and dangerous surfing competition to take place.
Revised: Massive waves pounded the North Shore of Oahu, Hawaii Tuesday, allowing for a rare surfing competition to take place.
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Original:  Conditions have to be nearly perfect for the competition to commence  
Revised:  Conditions have to be nearly perfect for the competition to commence . 
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Original:  A competitor surfs on a massive wave during the rare competition
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Original: Ian Narev , the CEO of the  has apologised "unreservedly" to clients who lost their money in a scandal involving their financial planning services arm.
Revised:  , the CEO of the has apologised "unreservedly" to clients who lost their money in a scandal involving their financial planning services arm.
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Original: Ian Narev , the CEO of the  has apologised "unreservedly" to clients who lost their money in a scandal involving their financial planning services arm.
Revised: Ian Narev , the CEO of the , has apologised "unreservedly" to clients who lost their money in a scandal involving their financial planning services arm.
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Original: Ian Narev , the CEO of the  has apologised "unreservedly" to clients who lost their money in a scandal involving their financial planning services arm.
Revised: Ian Narev , the CEO of the has apologised "unreservedly" to clients who lost their money in a scandal involving the bank's financial planning services arm.
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Original:  Last week, a Senate enquiry found that financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in hundreds of millions of dollars being lost.
Revised:  Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in hundreds of millions of dollars being lost.
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Original:  Last week, a Senate enquiry found that financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in hundreds of millions of dollars being lost.
Revised:  Last week, a Senate enquiry found that financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in hundreds of millions of being lost.
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Original:  The Senate enquiry called for a Royal Commission into the bank, and the (ASIC).
Revised:  The Senate enquiry called for a into the bank, and the (ASIC).
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Original:  Mr Narev stated that the bank's performance in providing financial advice was "unacceptable", and that the bank was launching a scheme to compensate clients who lost their money due to advice given by the planners.
Revised:  Mr Narev stated the bank's performance in providing financial advice was "unacceptable", and that the bank was launching a scheme to compensate clients who lost their money due to advice given by the planners.
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Original:  Mr Narev stated that the bank's performance in providing financial advice was "unacceptable", and that the bank was launching a scheme to compensate clients who lost their money due to advice given by the planners.
Revised:  Mr Narev stated that the bank's performance in providing financial advice was "unacceptable", and the bank was launching a scheme to compensate clients who lost their money due to advice given by the planners.
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Original:  The Senate inquiry into the Commonwealth Bank's financial planning division and ASIC was initiated by an investigation by Fairfax Media .
Revised:  The Senate inquiry into the Commonwealth Bank's financial planning division and ASIC was initiated by an investigation by .
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Original:  Whistleblower Jeff Morris , who reported the misconduct of the bank to ASIC six years ago, said in an article for the that neither the bank nor ASIC should not be in control of the compensation program
Revised:  Whistleblower , who reported the misconduct of the bank to ASIC six years ago, said in an article for the that neither the bank nor ASIC should not be in control of the compensation program
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Original:  Whistleblower Jeff Morris , who reported the misconduct of the bank to ASIC six years ago, said in an article for the that neither the bank nor ASIC should not be in control of the compensation program
Revised:  Whistleblower Jeff Morris , who reported the misconduct of the bank to ASIC six years ago, said in an article for that neither the bank nor ASIC should not be in control of the compensation program
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Original:  Whistleblower Jeff Morris , who reported the misconduct of the bank to ASIC six years ago, said in an article for the that neither the bank nor ASIC should not be in control of the compensation program
Revised:  Whistleblower Jeff Morris , who reported the misconduct of the bank to ASIC six years ago, said in an article for the that neither the bank nor ASIC should be in control of the compensation program
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Original: In a statement Mr Narev said, "Poor advice provided by some of our advisers between 2003 and 2012 caused financial loss and distress and I am truly sorry for that.  . . There have been changes in management, structure and culture.
Revised: In a statement Mr Narev said, "Poor advice provided by some of our advisers between 2003 and 2012 caused financial loss and distress and I am truly sorry for that. .. . . There have been changes in management, structure and culture.
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Original: In a statement Mr Narev said, "Poor advice provided by some of our advisers between 2003 and 2012 caused financial loss and distress and I am truly sorry for that.  . . There have been changes in management, structure and culture.
Revised: In a statement Mr Narev said, "Poor advice provided by some of our advisers between 2003 and 2012 caused financial loss and distress and I am truly sorry for that. . There have been changes in management, structure and culture.
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Original: , the CEO of the , this morning "unreservedly" apologised to clients who lost their money in a scandal involving the bank's financial planning services arm.
Revised: , the CEO of the , this morning "unreservedly" apologised to clients who lost money in a scandal involving the bank's financial planning services arm.
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Original:  Mr Narev stated the bank's performance in providing financial advice was "unacceptable", and the bank was launching a scheme to compensate clients who lost their money due to advice given by the planners .
Revised:  Mr Narev stated the bank's performance in providing financial advice was "unacceptable", and the bank was launching a scheme to compensate clients who lost money due to advice given by the planners .
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Original:  Mr Narev stated the bank's performance in providing financial advice was "unacceptable", and the bank was launching a scheme to compensate clients who lost their money due to advice given by the planners .
Revised:  Mr Narev stated the bank's performance in providing financial advice was "unacceptable", and the bank was launching a scheme to compensate clients who lost their money due to the planners' actions .
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Original: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in  hundreds of millions of being lost .
Revised: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had made high-risk investments of clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in hundreds of millions of being lost .
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Original: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in  hundreds of millions of being lost .
Revised: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money without the clients' permission, resulting in hundreds of millions of being lost .
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Original: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in  hundreds of millions of being lost .
Revised: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in loss of hundreds of millions of being lost .
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Original: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in  hundreds of millions of being lost .
Revised: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had placed clients' money into high-risk investments without their permission, resulting in hundreds of millions of .
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Original: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had made high-risk investments of clients' money without the clients' permission, resulting in loss of hundreds of millions of  .
Revised: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had made high-risk investments of clients' money without the clients' permission, resulting in hundreds of millions of .
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Original: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had made high-risk investments of clients' money without the clients' permission, resulting in loss of hundreds of millions of  .
Revised: Last week, a enquiry found financial advisers from the Commonwealth Bank had made high-risk investments of clients' money without the clients' permission, resulting in loss of hundreds of millions of lost .
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Original: The southern Philippines suffers from frequently banditry, loosely supervised government-armed militias, and Muslim and communist insurgents.
Revised: The southern Philippines suffers from frequent banditry, loosely supervised government-armed militias, and Muslim and communist insurgents.
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Original:  Camara was apparently shot during an argument with Diakite over who should take responsibility for the killing of dozens of opposition protesters in Guinea's capital, Conakry, on September 28 
Revised:  Camara was apparently shot during an argument with Diakite over who should take responsibility for the killing of dozens of opposition protesters in Guinea's capital, Conakry, on September 28. 
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Original: Pirates have continued to hijack vessels  despite the presence of foreign naval patrols near Somalia .
Revised: Pirates have continued to hijack vessels despite the presence of foreign naval patrols in the area .
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Original: The leader of the Diko party, Papadopoulos’s former alliance, realised a statement.
Revised: The leader of the Diko party, Papadopoulos’s former alliance, released a statement.
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Original:  Singing continued for over 15 minutes before activists said their final goodbyes to building staff and security cameras and retired to the nearby Stop the War Coalition offices for hot refreshments.
Revised:  Singing continued for over fifteen minutes before activists said their final goodbyes to building staff and security cameras and retired to the nearby Stop the War Coalition offices for hot refreshments.
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Original:  According to the Premises Manager, Lockheed Martin's lease on their Carlisle Place offices expires in less than two years time , at which point Lockheed will most likely not renew their leaseand will relocate due to their location now becoming public knowledge, making it a target for protests, actions and singing
Revised:  According to the Premises Manager, Lockheed Martin's lease on their Carlisle Place offices expires in less than two years time . Lockheed will likely not renew their leaseand will relocate due to their location now becoming public knowledge, making it a target for protests, actions and singing
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Original:  According to the Premises Manager, Lockheed Martin's lease on their Carlisle Place offices expires in less than two years time , at which point Lockheed will most likely not renew their leaseand will relocate due to their location now becoming public knowledge, making it a target for protests, actions and singing
Revised:  According to the Premises Manager, Lockheed Martin's lease on their Carlisle Place offices expires in less than two years time , at which point Lockheed will most likely not renew the lease, instead relocating due to the location becoming public knowledge, making it a target for protests, actions and singing
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