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Original: Robert Bales  , 38, a US Army sargeant , was formally charged with 17 counts of premeditated , alongwith 6 counts of attempted murder on Friday.
Revised: Robert Bales , 38, a US Army sargeant , was formally charged with 17 counts of premeditated , alongside six counts of attempted murder on Friday.
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Original:  Bales was charged in connection with a shooting spree which occurred in two southern Afghanistan villages earlier this month
Revised:  Bales was charged in connection with a shooting spree in two southern Afghanistan villages earlier this month
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Original: US Army Staff Sargeant Robert Bales Robert Bales, 38, a sergeant, was formally charged with seventeen counts of premeditated , alongside six counts of attempted murder on Friday.
Revised: US Army Staff Sargeant Robert Bales Robert Bales, 38, a sergeant, was formally charged with seventeen counts of premeditated alongside six counts of attempted murder on Friday.
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Original:  Last night at the Hawker International Softball Centre, , the Australian Sport Commission and the federal government through reaffirmed their support of indigenous softball, the most popular sport for indigenous women.
Revised:  Last night at the Hawker International Softball Centre, , the Australian Sport Commission and the Federal Government through reaffirmed their support of indigenous softball, the most popular sport for indigenous women.
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Original:  Their support was part of a number of activities to celebrate indigenous softball prior to the start of two games between the Aussie Spirit and the including a demonstration game between youth teams from the and , a cultural performance  and several speakers including Leigh, an Aboriginal elder from the Ngunnawal people and a representative from the Australian Sport Commission.
Revised:  Their support was part of a number of activities to celebrate indigenous softball prior to the start of two games between the Aussie Spirit and the including a demonstration game between youth teams from the and , a cultural performance , and several speakers including Leigh, an Aboriginal elder from the Ngunnawal people and a representative from the Australian Sport Commission.
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Original:  Their support was part of a number of activities to celebrate indigenous softball prior to the start of two games between the Aussie Spirit and the including a demonstration game between youth teams from the and , a cultural performance  and several speakers including Leigh, an Aboriginal elder from the Ngunnawal people and a representative from the Australian Sport Commission.
Revised:  Their support was part of a number of activities to celebrate indigenous softball prior to the start of two games between the Aussie Spirit and the including a demonstration game between youth teams from the and , a cultural performance and several speakers including Leigh, an Aboriginal elder from the Ngunnawal tribe, and a representative from the Australian Sport Commission.
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Original:  Indigenous competitors represent Australia on the highest level in softball, with two aboriginal players on the , Vanessa Stokes and Stacey Porter, and one aboriginal player on the , Jeff Goolagong.
Revised:  Indigenous competitors represent Australia at the highest level in softball, with two aboriginal players on the , Vanessa Stokes and Stacey Porter, and one aboriginal player on the , Jeff Goolagong.
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Original:  Softball Australia has made a commitment to indigenous Australian involvement  not just player participation  but in leadership roles, with 183 indigenous Australians involved in these roles across all levels of Softball Australia.
Revised:  Softball Australia has made a commitment to indigenous Australian involvement , not just player participation but in leadership roles, with 183 indigenous Australians involved in these roles across all levels of Softball Australia.
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Original:  Softball Australia has made a commitment to indigenous Australian involvement  not just player participation  but in leadership roles, with 183 indigenous Australians involved in these roles across all levels of Softball Australia.
Revised:  Softball Australia has made a commitment to indigenous Australian involvement not just player participation , but in leadership roles, with 183 indigenous Australians involved in these roles across all levels of Softball Australia.
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Original:  Everyone is involved to increasing participation across gender lines, and in the coming year, they will support over one hundred programs for the community.
Revised:  Everyone is involved in increasing participation across gender lines, and in the coming year, they will support over one hundred programs for the community.
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Original:  Leigh through out the ceremonial first pitch for the game
Revised:  Leigh threw the ceremonial first pitch for the game
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Original:   The last game of the series came down to Australia's final batter.
Revised:  The series had important implications for both teams as coaches on each side need to bring their rosters down from twenty to seventeen ahead of the World Championships later this year in Canada. The last game of the series came down to Australia's final batter.
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Original:  In the run down to try to tag her out, the catcher made an error and overthrew the ball to the third baseman that allowed Warwick to score and end the game  
Revised:  In the run down to try to tag her out, the catcher made an error and overthrew the ball to the third baseman that allowed Warwick to score and end the game . 
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Original:  On last night, Australia won the first game 5-3 and lost the second one 7-1  
Revised:  On last night, Australia won the first game 5-3 and lost the second one 7-1 . 
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Original: This afternoon, Australia finished their test series against with a 6-5 victory, winning two of seven games against the second ranked team in the world.
Revised: This afternoon, the Aussie Spirit finished their test series against with a 6-5 victory, winning two of seven games against the second ranked team in the world.
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Original:  Related news Japan beats Aussie Spirit in first two games of series Adam Folkard and Nick Norton ready for more men's softbal
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Original: This afternoon, the Aussie Spirit finished their test series against  with a 6-5 victory, winning two  of seven games against the second ranked team in the world.
Revised: This afternoon, the Aussie Spirit finished their test series against the with a 6-5 victory, winning two of seven games against the second ranked team in the world.
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Original: This afternoon, the Aussie Spirit finished their test series against  with a 6-5 victory, winning two  of seven games against the second ranked team in the world.
Revised: This afternoon, the Aussie Spirit finished their test series against with a 6-5 victory, winning two out of seven games against the second ranked team in the world.
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Original:  The series had important implications for both teams as coaches on each side need to bring their rosters down from twenty to seventeen ahead of the World Championships later this year in Canada.
Revised:  The series had important implications for both teams as their coaches need to trim their rosters down from twenty to seventeen ahead of the World Championships later this year in Canada.
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Original:  On last night, Australia won the first game 5-3 and lost the second one 7-1.
Revised:  Last night, Australia won the first game 5-3 and lost the second one 7-1.
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Original:  Last night, Australia won the first game 5-3 and lost the second one 7-1.
Revised:  Friday night, Australia won the first game 5-3 and lost the second one 7-1.
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Original: Terrorists from the Pakistan-based outfit Lashkar-e-Toiba massacred over 20 villagers in the Doda district of the Indian state of Jammu & Kashmir  .
Revised: Suspected militants shot dead over 20 villagers in the Doda district of the Indian state of Jammu & Kashmir .
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Original:   Eyewitnesses say armed men in military fatigues raided the village, made the residents line up and then opened fire on them injuring 9 villagers and killing the rest . Brigadier Choudhary of the General Staff, 16 Corps (the Indian Army battalion stationed in the area) has said that military helicopters are being pressed into service to rescue the injured .
Revised:  Eyewitnesses say armed men in military fatigues raided the village, made the residents line up and then opened fire on them injuring 9 villagers and killing the rest .
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Original: The attack by the separatists comes just after by-elections in the state and just before Prime Minister Manmohan Singh's meeting with militant leaders.
Revised: The attack comes just after by-elections in the state and just before Prime Minister Manmohan Singh's meeting with militant leaders.
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Original: 200px|Map over India highlighting the district Jammu Kashmir.
Revised:  Kashmir.
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Original:  Suspected Muslim militants shot dead over 20 villagers in the Doda district of the Indian state of Jammu%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Kashmir early on Monday morning.
Revised:  Suspected Muslim militants shot dead over 20 villagers in the Doda district of the Indian state of Jammu%DIFDELCMD < & %%% 
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Original:  No group has claimed responsibility for the attacks, but police suspect that the Pakistan-based Lashkar-e-Toiba is involved and have called the attack "pre-planned."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Eyewitnesses say armed men in military fatigues raided the village, made the residents line up and then opened fire on them injuring 9 villagers and killing the rest.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Eyewitnesses say armed men in military fatigues raided the village, made the residents line up and then opened fire on them injuring 9 villagers and killing the rest.
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Original:  No group has claimed responsibility for the attacks, but police suspect that the Pakistan-based Lashkar-e-Toiba is involved and have called the attack "pre-planned."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Eyewitnesses say armed men in military fatigues raided the village, made the residents line up and then opened fire on them injuring 9 villagers and killing the rest.
Revised:  No group has claimed responsibility for the attacks, but police suspect that the Pakistan-based Lashkar-e-Toiba is involved and have called the attack "pre-planned."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Mr Joyce said that anything done in a rush doesn't turn out well.
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Original: On March 20, Sqoot, an  that delivers daily deals like and , posted an online advert for their upcoming Boston API Jam.
Revised: On March 20, Sqoot, an provider that delivers daily deals like and , posted an online advert for their upcoming Boston API Jam.
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Original:  The Jam promoted various perks for the event, including an in-house DJ, cocktails, s and access to women: women specifically there to serve beer to attendees.
Revised:  The advert promoted various perks for the event, including an in-house DJ, cocktails, s and access to women: women specifically there to serve beer to attendees.
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Original:  The Jam promoted various perks for the event, including an in-house DJ, cocktails, s and access to women: women specifically there to serve beer to attendees.
Revised:  The Jam promoted various perks for the event, including an in-house DJ, cocktails, and access to women: women specifically there to serve beer to attendees.
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Original:  As soon as the ad was posted to and tweeted the Twittersphere went crazy .
Revised:  As soon as the ad was posted to , many on Twitter expressed concern .
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Original:  Over 3,000 tweets later, the advert was deemed sexist by many and Twitter users began not only questioning Sqoot , but also questioning the sponsors of the event.
Revised:  Over 3,000 tweets later, the advert was deemed sexist by many and Twitter users condemned both Sqoot and contacted the sponsors of the event.
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Original:  The ad, which Alex Williams of SiliconANGLE described as "bizarre" and "misogynist," was quietly changed on EventBrite by Sqoot, removing the mention of women as beer peddlers.
Revised:  The ad, which Alex Williams of SiliconANGLE described as "bizarre" and "misogynist," was quietly changed on Eventbrite by Sqoot, removing the mention of women as beer peddlers.
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Original:  If Sqoot’s business collapses for a few sentences of sexist copy, I hope that other young founders get to see the wreckage before following them off the plank."  and advisory board member for , Lukas Blakk , believes that having a code of conduct in place is a necessity for businesses, and for those businesses who don't "you’ve got a ticking time bomb in your organization’s future."
Revised:  If Sqoot’s business collapses for a few sentences of sexist copy, I hope that other young founders get to see the wreckage before following them off the plank." Lukas Blakk, a and advisory board member for , Lukas Blakk , believes that having a code of conduct in place is a necessity for businesses, and for those businesses who don't "you’ve got a ticking time bomb in your organization’s future."
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Original:  This caused them to postpone the event and apologize in response to over thousands of tweets that opposed the advert and it's sexist content.
Revised:  This caused them to postpone the event and apologize in response to thousands of tweets that opposed the advert and it's sexist content.
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Original:  This caused them to postpone the event and apologize in response to over thousands of tweets that opposed the advert and it's sexist content.
Revised:  This caused them to postpone the event and apologize in response to over thousands of tweets that opposed the advert and its sexist content.
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Original:  This caused them to postpone the event and apologize in response to thousands of tweets that opposed the advert and its sexist content .
Revised:  This caused them to postpone the event and apologize in response to thousands of tweets that opposed the advert and found its content sexist .
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Original:  Over 3,000 tweets later, the advert was deemed sexist by many and Twitter users condemned both Sqoot and contacted the sponsors of the event.
Revised:  Over 3,000 tweets later, the advert was deemed sexist by many and Twitter users both condemned Sqoot and contacted the sponsors of the event.
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Original:  Within 24-hours of posting a web advertisement for an upcoming hackathon in  , Massachusetts, web startup Sqoot has lost four sponsors for the event, in what has been described as the "worst startup PR crisis in recent history."
Revised:  Within 24-hours of posting a web advertisement for an upcoming hackathon in Boston , Massachusetts, web startup Sqoot has lost four sponsors for the event, in what has been described as the "worst startup PR crisis in recent history."
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Original:  Similar to EROS A, the EROS B satellite is expected to provide services for 8-10 year 
Revised:  Similar to EROS A, the EROS B satellite is expected to provide services for 8-10 years. 
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Original:  Similar to EROS A, the EROS B satellite is expected to provide services for 8-10 years . Category:Israel Category:Middle East Category:Space Category:Politics and conflic
Revised:  Similar to EROS A, the EROS B satellite is expected to provide services for 8-10 years Category:Israel Category:Middle East Category:Space Category:Politics and conflic
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Original:  Similar to EROS A, the EROS B satellite is expected to provide services for 8-10 years . Category:Israel Category:Middle East Category:Space Category:Politics and conflic
Revised:  Similar to EROS A, the EROS B satellite is expected to provide services for 8-10 years . 
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Original:  The Israeli dual-use satellite can observe small details everywhere in the world . Analysts say the timing  shows that Israel wants to follow IranNuclear Facilities to assess the threat for Israeli security.
Revised:  The Israeli dual-use satellite can observe small details everywhere in the world . Analysts say the timing shows that Israel intends to carefully monitor Iran's nuclear facilities to assess the threat for Israeli security.
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Original:   Israelis commemorate today those who fell in military service and in terror attacks since the UN resolution on the establishment of the state in November 29, 1947.
Revised:  Israelis commemorate today those who have fallen in military service and in terror attacks since the UN resolution on the establishment of the state in November 29, 1947.
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Original:  Israeli Chief of Staff, Major General Dan Halutz, said that the threat from Iran shows that Israel must be strong to defend its people .
Revised:  Israeli Chief of Staff, Major General Dan Halutz, said that the threat from Iran shows that Israel must be strong to defend its people 
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Original:  Some of the companies include , the United States based Exxon Mobil Corporation, Brazil's Petroleo Brasileiro SA, Spanish-Argentine Repsol YPF SA  and Great Britain's BG Group PLC and BP PLC.
Revised:  Some of the companies include the United States based Exxon Mobil Corporation, Brazil's Petroleo Brasileiro SA, Spanish-Argentine Repsol YPF SA and Great Britain's BG Group PLC and BP PLC.
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Original:  Some of the companies include , the United States based Exxon Mobil Corporation, Brazil's Petroleo Brasileiro SA, Spanish-Argentine Repsol YPF SA  and Great Britain's BG Group PLC and BP PLC.
Revised:  Some of the companies include , the United States based Exxon Mobil Corporation, Brazil's Petroleo Brasileiro SA, Spanish-Argentine Repsol YPF SA , and Great Britain's BG Group PLC and BP PLC.
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Original:  The decree also says that companies have 180 days to sign over their fields , or leave the country.
Revised:  The decree also says that companies have 180 days to sign over their fields or leave the country.
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Original: 120px|President  Morales Evo Morales, President of Bolivia, has ordered that all foreign owned natural gas fields be turned over to the country.
Revised: 120px|President Evo Morales Evo Morales, President of Bolivia, has ordered that all foreign owned natural gas fields be turned over to the country.
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Original: 120px|President  Morales Evo Morales, President of Bolivia, has ordered that all foreign owned natural gas fields be turned over to the country.
Revised: 120px|President Morales Evo Morales, President of Bolivia, has ordered that all foreign-owned natural gas fields be turned over to the country.
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Original:  One of Mr Morales vows in his presidential campain was to "recover" the country's natural resources by renationalising them.
Revised:  One of Morales' vows in his presidential campain was to "recover" the country's natural resources by renationalising them.
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Original:  One of Mr Morales vows in his presidential campain was to "recover" the country's natural resources by renationalising them.
Revised:  One of Mr Morales vows in his presidential campain was to "recover" the country's natural resources by renationalizing them.
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Original:  The art collection was donated by Dr. Vance E. Kondon and wife, Elisabeth Giesberger to both the and the . Kondon, who was a former board member of the Museum of Contemporary Art, died in 1997 and Giesberger died in 2010.
Revised:  The art collection was donated by Dr. Vance E. Kondon and Elisabeth Giesberger to both the and the . Kondon, who was a former board member of the Museum of Contemporary Art, died in 1997 and Giesberger died in 2010.
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Original: The collection will be separated between the two museums due to the nature of the collection .
Revised: The collection will be separated between the two museums due to the art movements represented within it .
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Original:  The couple, notable art collectors in San Diego, created their vast collection over the course of 30 years.
Revised:  Kondon was a notable art collector in San Diego, created their vast collection over the course of 30 years.
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Original:  The couple, notable art collectors in San Diego, created their vast collection over the course of 30 years.
Revised:  The couple, notable art collectors in San Diego, and collected for over 30 years.
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Original:  Roxana Velásquez, SDMA executive director, described the bequeathed collection as "rare" and said the pieces would add "depth" to the two existing museum collections.
Revised:  Roxana Velásquez, SDMA executive director, described their bequeathed collection as "rare" and said the pieces would add "depth" to the two existing museum collections.
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Original:  Roxana Velásquez, SDMA executive director, described their bequeathed collection as " rare " and said the pieces would add "depth" to the two existing museum collections.
Revised:  Roxana Velásquez, SDMA executive director, described their bequeathed collection 's " rare " and said the pieces would add "depth" to the two existing museum collections.
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Original:  Roxana Velásquez, SDMA executive director, described their bequeathed collection as " rare " and said the pieces would add "depth" to the two existing museum collections.
Revised:  Roxana Velásquez, SDMA executive director, described their bequeathed collection as " rarity " and said the pieces would add "depth" to the two existing museum collections.
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Original: Rick Santorum United States presidential hopeful  won yesterday evening's .
Revised: Rick Santorum United States presidential hopeful Rick Santorum won yesterday evening's .
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Original:  This win gives Santorum more leverage over fellow presidental hopeful , . To date, Santorum has 263 delegates, following behind Romney's 563 delegates.
Revised:  This win gives Santorum more leverage over fellow presidental hopeful Mitt Romney . To date, Santorum has 263 delegates, following behind Romney's 563 delegates.
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Original:  Santorum has had success in the primaries in the South, winning primaries in  , , , , and now Louisiana.
Revised:  Santorum has had success in the primaries in the South, winning primaries in , and now Louisiana.
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Original: Just remove yourself from BlueSecurity, and make it easier on you .
Revised: Just remove yourself from BlueSecurity, and make it easier on you 
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Original:  Another version:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hey, You are recieving this email because you are a member of BlueSecurity URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% You signed up because you were expecting to recieve a lesser amount of spam, unfortunately, due to the tactics used by BlueSecurity, you will end up recieving this message, or other nonsensical spams 20-40 times more than you would normally.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hey, You are recieving this email because you are a member of BlueSecurity URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% You signed up because you were expecting to recieve a lesser amount of spam, unfortunately, due to the tactics used by BlueSecurity, you will end up recieving this message, or other nonsensical spams 20-40 times more than you would normally.
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