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Original:  Todd Kimberlain, a NHC forecaster, has said Otto is expected to move northeastwards as before during the next 24 to 36 hours in between a large deep-layer trough over the northwest Atlantic and a subtropical ridge to its east  [ [  
Revised:  Todd Kimberlain, a NHC forecaster, has said Otto is expected to move northeastwards as before during the next 24 to 36 hours in between a large deep-layer trough over the northwest Atlantic and a subtropical ridge to its east . [ [ 
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Original:  Otto is the seventeenth Atlantic tropical cyclone and fifteenth named storm of  2010 Atlantic hurricane season.
Revised:  Otto is the seventeenth Atlantic tropical cyclone and fifteenth named storm of the 2010 Atlantic hurricane season.
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Original:  Hurricane Otto has been downgraded to a tropical storm, and is expected to move northeastwards into the Atlantic Ocean over the weekend.
Revised:  Hurricane Otto has been downgraded to a tropical storm, and is expected to move northeast into the Atlantic Ocean over the weekend.
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Original:  According to reports, US aircrafts fired four missiles in North Waziristan, which killed seven or eight rebels and destroyed two cars parked outside a building.
Revised:  According to reports, US aircraft fired four missiles in North Waziristan, which killed seven or eight rebels and destroyed two cars parked outside a building.
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Original:  An intelligence official informed AFP that at least seven militants were killed in the incident while three  were wounded.
Revised:  An intelligence official informed AFP that at least seven militants were killed in the incident while three others were wounded.
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Original:  However, Pakistani officials said the area was a stronghold of a rebel group headed by Hafiz Gul Bahadur  which regularly attacks NATO officials in the country.
Revised:  However, Pakistani officials said the area was a stronghold of a rebel group headed by Hafiz Gul Bahadur , which regularly attacks NATO officials in the country.
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Original:  The first of the two attacks occurred when two missiles fired at a pair of cars beside a camp located near Mir Ali of North Waziristan, killed six people.
Revised:  The first of the two attacks occurred when two missiles fired at a pair of cars beside a camp located near Mir Ali , North Waziristan, killed six people.
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Original: A judge in Baghdad, Iraq, has cleared two men of murdering six soldiers from the UK . Hamza Hateer and Mussa Ismael al Fartusi had their case kicked out by a judge prior to trial owing to a lack of evidence;
Revised: A judge in Baghdad, Iraq, has cleared two men of murdering six soldiers from the United Kingdom . Hamza Hateer and Mussa Ismael al Fartusi had their case kicked out by a judge prior to trial owing to a lack of evidence;
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Original:  Though Hamilton set a third time, he lost 5 places on a starting grid for a gearbox change.
Revised:  Though Hamilton posted the third fastest time, he lost 5 places on a starting grid for a gearbox change.
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Original:  Though Hamilton set a third time, he lost 5 places on a starting grid for a gearbox change.
Revised:  Though Hamilton set a third time, he lost 5 places on the starting grid for a gearbox change.
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Original:  After Robert Kubica lost a rear wheel of his Renault car and retired from the race, it 's Fernando Alonso who owned the third place on the podium for Ferrari, after he won a nightly event at Singapore Jenson Button (McLaren) passed his teammate Hamilton after he lost his third gear.
Revised:  After Robert Kubica lost a rear wheel from his Renault car and retired from the race, it 's Fernando Alonso who owned the third place on the podium for Ferrari, after he won a nightly event at Singapore Jenson Button (McLaren) passed his teammate Hamilton after he lost his third gear.
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Original:  After Robert Kubica lost a rear wheel of his Renault car and retired from the race, it 's Fernando Alonso who owned the third place on the podium for Ferrari, after he won a nightly event at Singapore Jenson Button (McLaren) passed his teammate Hamilton after he lost his third gear.
Revised:  After Robert Kubica lost a rear wheel of his Renault car and retired from the race, it was Fernando Alonso who owned the third place on the podium for Ferrari, after he won a nightly event at Singapore Jenson Button (McLaren) passed his teammate Hamilton after he lost his third gear.
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Original:  After Robert Kubica lost a rear wheel of his Renault car and retired from the race, it 's Fernando Alonso who owned the third place on the podium for Ferrari, after he won a nightly event at Singapore Jenson Button (McLaren) passed his teammate Hamilton after he lost his third gear.
Revised:  After Robert Kubica lost a rear wheel of his Renault car and retired from the race, it 's Fernando Alonso who owned the third place on the podium for Ferrari, after he won a nightly event at Singapore Jenson Button (McLaren) passed his teammate Hamilton after the latter lost his third gear.
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Original:  They finished 4-5 . Nico Rosberg lost his rear wheel and retired just as Kubica  earlier.
Revised:  They finished 4-5 . Nico Rosberg lost his rear wheel and retired just as Kubica did earlier.
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Original:  His teammate Michael Schumacher came 6th for Mercedes factory team.
Revised:  His teammate Michael Schumacher came sixth for Mercedes factory team.
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Original:  Two Saubers of Kamui Kobayashi and Nick Heidfeld, a Williams of Rubens Barrichello and a Toro Rosso of Sebastien Buemi closed the top ten drivers in a lap with a leader.
Revised:  Two Saubers of Kamui Kobayashi and Nick Heidfeld, a Williams of Rubens Barrichello and a Toro Rosso of Sebastien Buemi closed the top ten drivers in the finishing lap with the leader.
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Original:  The situation in the season standings strengthen as both Alonso and Vettel are now 14 points behind Mark Webber and both McLaren drivers are following on their heels.
Revised:  The situation in the season standings tightens as both Alonso and Vettel are now 14 points behind Mark Webber and both McLaren drivers are following on their heels.
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Original:  The situation in the season standings strengthen as both Alonso and Vettel are now 14 points behind Mark Webber and both McLaren drivers are following on their heels.
Revised:  The situation in the season standings strengthen as both Alonso and Vettel are now 14 points behind Mark Webber , and the two McLaren drivers are following on their heels.
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Original:  Constructor chamionship standings are more clearly owned by Red Bull, as McLaren is 45 points behind and Ferrari is 92 points behind.
Revised:  Constructor championship standings are more clearly owned by Red Bull, as McLaren is 45 points behind and Ferrari is 92 points behind.
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Original:  The European Union was forced to pull a stop smoking advert last year after objections for animal welfare groups, and car manufaturer Dodge also withdrew an advert which feutured a chimpanzee after animal rights groups lodged complaints.
Revised:  The European Union was forced to pull a stop smoking advert last year after objections for animal welfare groups, and car manufaturer Dodge also withdrew an advert which featured a chimpanzee after animal rights groups lodged complaints.
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Original: However, the shelter will face security demands diffrent from the fifteen Cape towns because Cape Edwards is an active base used for training excersies . Security will be overseen by the Massachusetts National Guard, with help from the Massachusetts State Police and the county sheriff's office.
Revised: However, the shelter will face security demands diffrent from the fifteen Cape towns because Cape Edwards is an active base used for training exercises . Security will be overseen by the Massachusetts National Guard, with help from the Massachusetts State Police and the county sheriff's office.
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Original:  Massachusetts governor Mitt Romney streesed that he wanted to give off a comfortable and not hostile atmosphere.
Revised:  Massachusetts governor Mitt Romney stressed that he wanted to give off a comfortable and not hostile atmosphere.
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Original:  These agnecies will coordinate voulenteers who most commit themselves to five days of voulenterring and they must be able to transport themselves to the Camp.
Revised:  These agencies will coordinate volunteers, who most commit themselves to five days of voulenterring and they must be able to transport themselves to the Camp.
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Original:  These agnecies will coordinate voulenteers who most commit themselves to five days of voulenterring and they must be able to transport themselves to the Camp.
Revised:  These agnecies will coordinate voulenteers who most commit themselves to five days of volunteer efforts, and they must be able to transport themselves to the Camp.
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Original:  There could be barracks for for single men, another for single women, and then space for eldery and famliles with children.
Revised:  There could be barracks for single men, another for single women, and then space for eldery and famliles with children.
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Original:  Bourne, Massachusetts School Superintendent Ed LaFleur will work on enrolling the chlidren of evacuees into Cape Cod schools.
Revised:  Bourne, Massachusetts School Superintendent Ed LaFleur will work on enrolling the children of evacuees into Cape Cod schools.
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Original:  Romney met yesterday , with leaders of the Blakc Churches Alliance , also avaliable on hand will chaplins and counselors for the evacuees.
Revised:  Romney met yesterday with leaders of the Blakc Churches Alliance , also avaliable on hand will chaplins and counselors for the evacuees.
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Original:  Romney met yesterday , with leaders of the Blakc Churches Alliance , also avaliable on hand will chaplins and counselors for the evacuees.
Revised:  Romney met yesterday , with leaders of the Blake Churches Alliance who will make avaliable chaplins and counselors for the evacuees.
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Original:  However, the arrival of the evacuees has been postponed for unknown reasons
Revised:  The expected arrival time of the evacuees has been postponed for unknown reasons
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Original: 250px The Commonwealth of Massachusetts is turning a portion of Camp Edwards, a active Cape Cod military base  into a "village" for 2,500 evacuees of Katrina  as part of Operation Helping Hand.
Revised: 250px The Commonwealth of Massachusetts is turning a portion of Camp Edwards, an active Cape Cod military base into a "village" for 2,500 evacuees of Katrina as part of Operation Helping Hand.
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Original: 250px The Commonwealth of Massachusetts is turning a portion of Camp Edwards, a active Cape Cod military base  into a "village" for 2,500 evacuees of Katrina  as part of Operation Helping Hand.
Revised: 250px The Commonwealth of Massachusetts is turning a portion of Camp Edwards, a active Cape Cod military base , into a "village" for 2,500 evacuees of Katrina as part of Operation Helping Hand.
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Original: 250px The Commonwealth of Massachusetts is turning a portion of Camp Edwards, a active Cape Cod military base  into a "village" for 2,500 evacuees of Katrina  as part of Operation Helping Hand.
Revised: 250px The Commonwealth of Massachusetts is turning a portion of Camp Edwards, a active Cape Cod military base into a "village" for 2,500 evacuees of Katrina , as part of Operation Helping Hand.
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Original:  However, the shelter will face security demands diffrent from the fifteen Cape towns because Cape Edwards is an active base used for training exercises.
Revised:  However, the shelter will face security demands different from the fifteen Cape towns because Cape Edwards is an active base used for training exercises.
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Original:  Security will be overseen by the Massachusetts National Guard, with help from the Massachusetts State Police and the county sheriff 's office.
Revised:  Security will be overseen by the Massachusetts National Guard, with help from the Massachusetts State Police and the County Sheriff 's office.
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Original:  Massachusetts governor Mitt Romney stressed that he wanted to give off a comfortableand not hostile atmosphere.
Revised:  Massachusetts Governor Mitt Romney stressed that he wanted to give off a comfortableand not hostile atmosphere.
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Original:  Massachusetts governor Mitt Romney stressed that he wanted to give off a comfortableand not hostile atmosphere.
Revised:  Massachusetts governor Mitt Romney stressed that he wanted to give it a comfortable, non-hostile atmosphere.
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Original:  Also, visitors will not be allowed.
Revised:  Visitors will not be allowed.
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Original:  Romney spent Monday night asking the for the State House to pass a $25 million emergency spending bill compensate initial costs of the facility.
Revised:  Romney spent Monday night asking the for the State House to pass a $25 million emergency spending bill to pay the initial costs of the facility.
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Original:  The expected arrival time of the evacuees has been postponed  for unknown reasons
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Original:  The expected arrival time of the evacuees has been postponed  for unknown reasons
Revised:  The expected arrival time of the evacuees has been postponed , for unknown reasons
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Original:  The temporary shelter on the Massachusetts Military Reservation will have a population the size of Truro, Massachsuetts and will include a active mayor and a system of goverment that will be like a town council Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officals will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
Revised:  The temporary shelter on the Massachusetts Military Reservation will have a population the size of Truro, Massachusetts and will include a active mayor and a system of goverment that will be like a town council Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officals will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
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Original:  The temporary shelter on the Massachusetts Military Reservation will have a population the size of Truro, Massachsuetts and will include a active mayor and a system of goverment that will be like a town council Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officals will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
Revised:  The temporary shelter on the Massachusetts Military Reservation will have a population the size of Truro, Massachsuetts and will include an active mayor and a system of goverment that will be like a town council Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officals will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
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Original:  The temporary shelter on the Massachusetts Military Reservation will have a population the size of Truro, Massachsuetts and will include a active mayor and a system of goverment that will be like a town council Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officals will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
Revised:  The temporary shelter on the Massachusetts Military Reservation will have a population the size of Truro, Massachsuetts and will include a active mayor and a system of government that will be like a town council Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officals will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
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Original:  The temporary shelter on the Massachusetts Military Reservation will have a population the size of Truro, Massachsuetts and will include a active mayor and a system of goverment that will be like a town council Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officals will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
Revised:  The temporary shelter on the Massachusetts Military Reservation will have a population the size of Truro, Massachsuetts and will include a active mayor and a system of goverment that will be like a town council Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officials will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
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Original:  The agencies that will be on hand are, the Massachusetts Emergency Mangament Agency, the American Red Cross and the Salvation Army.
Revised:  The agencies that will be on hand are, the Massachusetts Emergency Management Agency, the American Red Cross and the Salvation Army.
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Original:  There could be barracks for single men, another for single women, and then space for eldery and famliles with children.
Revised:  There could be barracks for single men, another for single women, and then space for elderly and families with children.
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Original:  Romney met yesterday with leaders of the Blake Churches Alliance who will make avaliable chaplins and counselors for the evacuees.
Revised:  Romney met yesterday with leaders of the Blake Churches Alliance who will make available chaplains and counselors for the evacuees.
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Original:  This became his second win of the season .
Revised:  This became his second win of the .
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Original:  Stewart was chased by Clint Bowyer up to the finish line, but they were not able to catch him this weekend.
Revised:  Stewart was chased by up to the finish line, but they were not able to catch him this weekend.
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Original:  Pole position winner Jamie McMurray had a couple problems earlier in the race, which prompted him to a seventeenth place finish.
Revised:  winner had a couple problems earlier in the race, which prompted him to a seventeenth place finish.
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Original:  Kasey Kahne , from the Richard Petty Motorsports team, clinched the fourth position, after leading no laps during the race.
Revised:  , from the Richard Petty Motorsports team, clinched the fourth position, after leading no laps during the race.
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Original:  Kasey Kahne , from the Richard Petty Motorsports team, clinched the fourth position, after leading no laps during the race.
Revised:  Kasey Kahne , from the team, clinched the fourth position, after leading no laps during the race.
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Original:  Ryan Newman followed Kahne in fifth, while Mark Martin could only manage sixth.
Revised:  followed Kahne in fifth, while Mark Martin could only manage sixth.
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Original:  Ryan Newman followed Kahne in fifth, while Mark Martin could only manage sixth.
Revised:  Ryan Newman followed Kahne in fifth, while could only manage sixth.
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Original:  Kevin Harvikc, Denny Hamlin, Jeff Gordon, and Davis Reutimann rounded out the top ten finishers in the race.
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Original:  Other drivers in the Chase, such as Kurt Busch finished twenty-first, and Greg Biffle finished in forty-first.
Revised:  Other drivers in the Chase, such as finished twenty-first, and Greg Biffle finished in forty-first.
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Original:  Other drivers in the Chase, such as Kurt Busch finished twenty-first, and Greg Biffle finished in forty-first.
Revised:  Other drivers in the Chase, such as Kurt Busch finished twenty-first, and finished in forty-first.
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Original:  We'll just keep doing what we're doing here.  
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Original:  However, the Star Trek theme does not require any singing, besides that of the female opera singer . Megan Mullally (Will%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Grace) and Donald Trump (The Apprentice) with the Green Acres theme.
Revised:  However, the Star Trek theme does not require any singing, besides that of the female opera singer Megan Mullally (Will%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Grace) and Donald Trump (The Apprentice) with the Green Acres theme.
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Original:  However, the Star Trek theme does not require any singing, besides that of the female opera singer . Megan Mullally (Will%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Grace) and Donald Trump (The Apprentice) with the Green Acres theme.
Revised:  However, the Star Trek theme does not require any singing, besides that of the female opera singer . %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Grace) and Donald Trump (The Apprentice) with the Green Acres theme.
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Original:  However, the Star Trek theme does not require any singing, besides that of the female opera singer . Megan Mullally (Will%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Grace) and Donald Trump (The Apprentice) with the Green Acres theme.
Revised:  However, the Star Trek theme does not require any singing, besides that of the female opera singer . Megan Mullally (Will%DIFDELCMD < & %%% 
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Original:  Gary Dourdan (CSI: Crime Scene Investigation) and R%DIFDELCMD < &%%% B artist Macy Gray with Movin' On Up from The Jeffersons
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Original:  Gary Dourdan (CSI: Crime Scene Investigation) and R%DIFDELCMD < &%%% B artist Macy Gray with Movin' On Up from The Jeffersons
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Original:  However, the Star Trek theme does not require any singing, besides that of the female opera singer   
Revised:  However, the Star Trek theme does not require any singing, besides that of the female opera singer . 
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Original:  Similar to the format of reality shows like American Idol and Rock Star: INXS, the audience will be able to vote on their favourite performance during the initial broadcast of the show.
Revised:  Similar to the format of reality shows like American Idol and Rock Star: INXS, the audience will be able to vote on their favorite performance during the initial broadcast of the show.
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Original:  William Shatner of Star Trek : The Original Series and opera singer Frederica von Stade will perform the theme from Star Trek.
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Original:  In honour of the victims of Hurricane Katrina, all Emmy presenters and performers will be given magnolias, the state flower of both Louisiana and Mississippi.
Revised:  In honor of the victims of Hurricane Katrina, all Emmy presenters and performers will be given magnolias, the state flower of both Louisiana and Mississippi.
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