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Original:  The  commercial tablets are compounded from ascorbic acid and sodium bicarbonate.
Revised:  The present-day commercial tablets are compounded from ascorbic acid and sodium bicarbonate.
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Original:  Redoxon was first marketed to the general public by Hoffman-La Roche in 1934 – the first mass-manufactured synthetic vitamin in history.
Revised:  Redoxon was first marketed to the general public by Hoffman-La Roche in 1934 , making it the first mass-manufactured synthetic vitamin in history.
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Original:  Using the bacteria , within a few days, it was possible to create 50 grams of sorboseusing this method, and it was then easy to synthesise ascorbic acidfrom this . Despite concern about using the wild strain of bacteria for fermentation-production of sorbose, the process was superior  to a rival method of Szent-Györgyi which isolated Vitamin C from capsicum  .
Revised:  The bacteria species was isolated and cultured and used in a fermentation process to make sorbose. From sorbose, chemical reactions were used to complete the synthesis of ascorbic acid . Despite concern about using the wild strain of bacteria for fermentation-production of sorbose, the process was superior to a rival method of Szent-Györgyi which isolated Vitamin C from capsicum .
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Original:  Using the bacteria , within a few days, it was possible to create 50 grams of sorboseusing this method, and it was then easy to synthesise ascorbic acidfrom this . Despite concern about using the wild strain of bacteria for fermentation-production of sorbose, the process was superior  to a rival method of Szent-Györgyi which isolated Vitamin C from capsicum  .
Revised:  Using the bacteria , within a few days, it was possible to create 50 grams of sorboseusing this method, and it was then easy to synthesise ascorbic acidfrom this . Despite concern about starting with a wild strain of bacteria for fermentation-production of sorbose, the process was superior to a rival method of Szent-Györgyi which isolated Vitamin C from capsicum .
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Original:  Using the bacteria , within a few days, it was possible to create 50 grams of sorboseusing this method, and it was then easy to synthesise ascorbic acidfrom this . Despite concern about using the wild strain of bacteria for fermentation-production of sorbose, the process was superior  to a rival method of Szent-Györgyi which isolated Vitamin C from capsicum  .
Revised:  Using the bacteria , within a few days, it was possible to create 50 grams of sorboseusing this method, and it was then easy to synthesise ascorbic acidfrom this . Despite concern about using the wild strain of bacteria for fermentation production of sorbose, the process was superior to a rival method of Szent-Györgyi which isolated Vitamin C from capsicum .
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Original:  Flies which fed upon sorbitol as a major food subtrate excreted bacteria which were able to synthesize sorbose from sorbitol.
Revised:  Flies which fed upon sorbitol as a major food subtrate excreted bacteria that were able to synthesize sorbose from sorbitol.
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Original:  The bacteria species was isolated and cultured and used in a fermentation process to make sorbose.
Revised:  The bacteria species was isolated , cultured and used in a fermentation process to make sorbose.
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Original:  Despite concern about starting with a wild strain of bacteria for fermentation production of sorbose, the process was superior in cost and yield to a rival method by Albert Szent-Györgyi which isolated Vitamin C from capsicum (peppers).
Revised:  Despite concern about starting with a wild strain of bacteria for fermentation production of sorbose, the process was superior in cost and yield to a rival method by Albert Szent-Györgyi that isolated Vitamin C from capsicum (peppers).
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Original: Redoxon was the brand name of the first artificially synthesized ascorbic acid ( Vitamin C).
Revised: Redoxon was the brand name of the first artificially synthesized ascorbic acid ( vitamin C).
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Original:  Despite concern about starting with a wild strain of bacteria for fermentation production of sorbose, the process was superior in cost and yield to a rival method by Albert Szent-Györgyi that isolated Vitamin C from capsicum (peppers).
Revised:  Despite concern about starting with a wild strain of bacteria for fermentation production of sorbose, the process was superior in cost and yield to a rival method by Albert Szent-Györgyi that isolated vitamin C from capsicum (peppers).
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Original: He has two sons, Mattannur Sreekanth and Mattannur Sreeraj.
Revised: Mattanur, as he is known, is married to Bharathi. They have two sons, Mattannur Sreekanth and Mattannur Sreeraj.
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Original:  Thus  the limited capacity of cells to replicate in culture may be directly relevant to organismal aging
Revised:  Thus , the limited capacity of cells to replicate in culture may be directly relevant to organismal aging
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Original: The concept of the Hayflick limit was advanced by American anatomist Leonard Hayflick in 1961, at the Wistar Institute in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania , United States . Hayflick demonstrated that a normal human fetal cell population will divide between 40 and 60 times in cell culture before entering a senescence phase.
Revised: The concept of the Hayflick limit was advanced by American anatomist Leonard Hayflick in 1961, at the Wistar Institute in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania . Hayflick demonstrated that a normal human fetal cell population will divide between 40 and 60 times in cell culture before entering a senescence phase.
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Original:  Thus, the limited capacity of cells to replicate in culture may be directly relevant to organismal aging . Cancer and cellular aging An anomaly to the cellular aging process is oncogenic cells.
Revised:  Thus, the limited capacity of cells to replicate in culture may be directly relevant to organismal aging Cancer and cellular aging An anomaly to the cellular aging process is oncogenic cells.
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Original:  A convenient memnoic is ABCDE - i.e.
Revised:  A convenient mnemonic is ABCDE - i.e.
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Original:  born 21 January 1985) is a Chechen professional boxer representing Russia, who has held the unified WBC and IBF light-heavyweight titles since 2019.
Revised:  born 21 January 1985) is a Russian professional boxer who has held the unified WBC and IBF light-heavyweight titles since 2019.
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Original:  born 21 January 1985) is a Chechen professional boxer , who has held the unified WBC and IBF light-heavyweight titles since 2019.
Revised:  born 21 January 1985) is a Russian professional boxer who has held the unified WBC and IBF light-heavyweight titles since 2019.
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Original:  born 21 January 1985) is a Russian professional boxer who has held the unified WBC and IBF light-heavyweight titles since 2019.
Revised:  born 21 January 1985) is a Russian professional boxer . He is a unified light-heavyweight titles since 2019.
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Original:  As of June 2021 he is recognized as the best active light-heavyweight by The Ring, the Transnational Boxing Rankings Board , and BoxRec.
Revised:  As of June 2021 he is recognized as the best active light-heavyweight by The Ring, Transnational Boxing Rankings Board , and BoxRec.
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Original:  As of November 2021 he is recognized as the best active light-heavyweight by The Ring,  Transnational Boxing Rankings Board and ESPN and second by BoxRec.
Revised:  As of November 2021 he is recognized as the best active light-heavyweight by The Ring, the Transnational Boxing Rankings Board and ESPN and second by BoxRec.
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Original:  Beturbiev appealed, arguing his contract with Michel had expired in March 2017, then agreed to an out-of-court settlement with Michel.
Revised:  Beterbiev appealed, arguing his contract with Michel had expired in March 2017, then agreed to an out-of-court settlement with Michel.
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Original:   3 Dec 2016 28Win26–2 Alejandro Emilio ValoriKO2 (10),
Revised:  , 3 Dec 2016 28Win26–2 Alejandro Emilio ValoriKO2 (10),
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Original:  He held the IBO cruiserweight title in 2015, the European cruiserweight title in 2014, and  challenged once for the WBC cruiserweight title in 2013.
Revised:  He held the IBO cruiserweight title in 2015, the European cruiserweight title in 2014, and has challenged once for the WBC cruiserweight title in 2013.
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Original:  born 11 January 1983) is a Russian professional boxer..
Revised:  born 11 January 1983) is a Russian retiredprofessional boxer..
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Original:  Yadollah Sahabi, Abbas F. Saffari He died at the age of 97 in Jam Hospital in Tehran . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
Revised:  Yadollah Sahabi, Abbas F. Saffari He died at the age of 97 in Jam Hospital in Tehran References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  Yadollah Sahabi, Abbas F. Saffari He died at the age of 97 in Jam Hospital in Tehran . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
Revised:  Yadollah Sahabi, Abbas F. Saffari He died at the age of 97 in Jam Hospital in Tehran . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  He came to prominence in the Philippines during the 1980s and internationally in 2007 as the then new lead singer of the American rock band Journey.
Revised:  He came to prominence in the Philippines during the 1980s and internationally in 2007 as the lead singer of the American rock band Journey.
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Original:  One way to integrate the concepts of limerence and NRE is to observe that in some cases the earliest stages of NRE, before mutuality of feelings is established, can exhibit a more transient and unstable limerence phase.
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Original: Scope of usage While the dynamics described by NRE apply to all relationships, the term is particularly prevalent in the polyamorous community, as people with multiple concurrent intimate relationships experience new relationship energy alongside more settled ongoing relationships.
Revised:  While the dynamics described by NRE apply to all relationships, the term is particularly prevalent in the polyamorous community, as people with multiple concurrent intimate relationships experience new relationship energy alongside more settled ongoing relationships.
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Original:  Applications New relationship energy is generally considered desirable, perhaps nearly indispensable in forming deep emotional bonds, but it can also temporarily distort perceptions and judgements and this must be taken into account.
Revised:  New relationship energy is generally considered desirable, perhaps nearly indispensable in forming deep emotional bonds, but it can also temporarily distort perceptions and judgements and this must be taken into account.
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Original:  Binghamton, NY: Haworth Press, 2006 Related terms Puppy love carries a connotation of immaturity, transience, and superficiality.
Revised:  Binghamton, NY: Haworth Press, 2006 Puppy love carries a connotation of immaturity, transience, and superficiality.
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Original: Origin The term originated in the Usenet postings of Zhahai Stewart in the 1980s and more widely presented in 1993.
Revised:  The term originated in the Usenet postings of Zhahai Stewart in the 1980s and more widely presented in 1993.
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Original: A related term is limerence, a state of intense romantic desire and anxiety which can vary from longing to intense joy or despair and conveys the sense of infatuation and unreason described by Dorothy Tennov in her book Love and Limerence.
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Original:  Definition of the concept reflects unawareness of limerence, which was first defined in 1979.
Revised:  This concept is very similar to that of limerence, which was first defined in 1979.
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Original:  See also Limerence, the state of mind which arises from romantic attraction Infatuation Obsessive love Puppy love
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Original:  This concept is very similar to that of limerence, which was first defined in 1979.
Revised:  This concept is similar to that of limerence, which was first defined in 1979.
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Original: Dwight Lowry [born Dwight Lowery] (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997) was a catcher in Major League Baseball who played for the Detroit Tigers and Minnesota Twins in parts of four seasons spanning 1984–1988.
Revised: Dwight Lowry [born Dwight Lowery] (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997) was a professional baseball catcher who played for the Detroit Tigers and Minnesota Twins in parts of four seasons spanning 1984–1988.
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Original:  Biography Born in Lumberton, North Carolina, Lowry attended the University of North Carolina earning a degree in Industrial Relations before playing professional baseball.
Revised:  Amateur career Born in Lumberton, North Carolina, Lowry attended the University of North Carolina earning a degree in Industrial Relations before playing professional baseball.
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Original:  He was drafted by the Detroit Tigers in the 11th round of the 1980 amateur draft, but did not make  his major league debut until he was 26 years old.
Revised:  He was drafted by the Detroit Tigers in the 11th round of the 1980 Major League Baseball draft. his major league debut until he was 26 years old.
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Original:  He was drafted by the Detroit Tigers in the 11th round of the 1980 amateur draft, but did not make  his major league debut until he was 26 years old.
Revised:  He was drafted by the Detroit Tigers in the 11th round of the 1980 amateur draft, but did not make his major league debut 
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Original:  Lowry debuted with the 1984 Detroit Tigers team that began the season with a 35–5 record, won 104 games  and beat the San Diego Padres in the World Series.
Revised:  with the 1984 Detroit Tigers team that began the season with a 35–5 record, won 104 games and beat the San Diego Padres in the World Series.
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Original:  Lowry debuted with the 1984 Detroit Tigers team that began the season with a 35–5 record, won 104 games  and beat the San Diego Padres in the World Series.
Revised:  Lowry debuted with the 1984 Detroit Tigers team that began the season with a 35–5 record, won 104 games , and beat the San Diego Padres in the World Series.
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Original:  As a backup for All-Star catcher Lance Parrish, Lowry appeared in 32 games for the Tigers in that season, hitting two home runs and driving in seven runs while scoring eight times.
Revised:  As a backup for All-Star catcher Lance Parrish, Lowry appeared in 32 games for the Tigers in that season, hitting 2 home runs and driving in seven runs while scoring eight times.
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Original:  As a backup for All-Star catcher Lance Parrish, Lowry appeared in 32 games for the Tigers in that season, hitting two home runs and driving in seven runs while scoring eight times.
Revised:  As a backup for All-Star catcher Lance Parrish, Lowry appeared in 32 games for the Tigers in that season, hitting two home runs and driving in 7 runs while scoring eight times.
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Original:  As a backup for All-Star catcher Lance Parrish, Lowry appeared in 32 games for the Tigers in that season, hitting two home runs and driving in seven runs while scoring eight times.
Revised:  As a backup for All-Star catcher Lance Parrish, Lowry appeared in 32 games for the Tigers in that season, hitting two home runs and driving in seven runs while scoring 8 times.
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Original:  Lowry's blast was the difference in the win that extended the Tigers' record-setting start to 32–5.
Revised:  His blast was the difference in the win that extended the Tigers' record-setting start to 32–5.
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Original:  On September 29, 1984, Lowry hit his second home run in an 11–3 win over the New York Yankees.
Revised:  On September 29, Lowry hit his second home run in an 11–3 win over the New York Yankees.
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Original:  Lowry did not play in the major leagues in 1985 but returned to the Tigers  in 1986, batting .307 in 56 games.
Revised:  Lowry spent the 1985 but returned to the Tigers in 1986, batting .307 in 56 games.
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Original:  Lowry did not play in the major leagues in 1985 but returned to the Tigers  in 1986, batting .307 in 56 games.
Revised:  Lowry did not play in the major leagues in 1985 but returned to the Tigers for 56 games in 1986, batting .307 in 56 games.
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Original:  He appeared in 13 more games in 1987, when the team again won AL Eastern division.
Revised:  He appeared in 13 games in 1987, when the team again won AL Eastern division.
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Original:  Lowry was released by the Tigers on October 16, 1987  and signed as a free agent by the Twins on October 23, 1987.
Revised:  Lowry was released by the Tigers on October 16, 1987 , and signed as a free agent by the Twins on October 23, 1987.
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Original:  Lowry was released by the Tigers on October 16, 1987  and signed as a free agent by the Twins on October 23, 1987.
Revised:  Lowry was released by the Tigers on October 16, 1987 and signed as a free agent with the Minnesota Twins on October 23, 1987.
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Original:  Lowry was released by the Tigers on October 16, 1987  and signed as a free agent by the Twins on October 23, 1987.
Revised:  Lowry was released by the Tigers on October 16, 1987 and signed as a free agent by the Twins on October 23.
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Original:  On April 27, 1988, the Twins optioned Lowry to Portland .
Revised:  On April 27, Minnesota optioned Lowry to Portland .
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Original:  In between, Lowry played winter ball with the Leones del Caracas club of the Venezuelan League in the 1985 – 1986 season.
Revised:  In between, Lowry played winter ball with the Leones del Caracas club of the Venezuelan League in the 1985 to 1986 season.
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Original:  In 1995, he led them to a first-place finish ( 86-55)in the South Atlantic League .
Revised:  In 1995, he led them to a first-place finish ( 86–55) .
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Original:  In 1996, the team's record dropped to 76–63, though they won the second-half South Atlantic League Division Title .
Revised:  In 1996, the team's record dropped to 76–63, though they won the second-half division title .
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Original:  For his work with the Generals, Lowry was named the Detroit Tigers Player Development Man of the Year. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1997, Lowry was assigned to manage the Jamestown Jammers of the Short Season-A New York–Penn League.
Revised:  For his work with the Generals, Lowry was named the Detroit Tigers Player Development Man of the Year. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1997, Lowry was assigned to manage the Jamestown Jammers of the Class A Short Season New York–Penn League.
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Original:   On July 10, just three weeks into the NY-PL season, he died of a heart attack at age 39 after collapsing outside his home in Jamestown, New York.
Revised:  Death On July 10, just three weeks into the NY-PL season, he died of a heart attack at age 39 after collapsing outside his home in Jamestown, New York.
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Original:   On July 10, just three weeks into the NY-PL season, he died of a heart attack at age 39 after collapsing outside his home in Jamestown, New York.
Revised:  On July 10, just three weeks into the New York–Penn League season, Lowry died of a heart attack at age 39 after collapsing outside his home in Jamestown, New York.
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Original:  He died suddenly within an hour of a victory at Russell Diethrick Park.
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Original:  Lowry, two daughters (Sesilie Lowry and Amanda Lowry) and a son (Zachary Lowry).
Revised:  Lowry, two daughters (Sesilie Lowry and Amanda Lowry) , and one son (Zachary Lowry).
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Original:  In 1988, he was inducted into the South Atlantic League Hall of Fame .
Revised:  He was inducted into the South Atlantic League Hall of Fame .
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Original: Dwight Lowry born Dwight Lowery (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997)  was a professional baseball catcher who played  for the Detroit Tigers  and Minnesota Twins of Major League Baseball (MLB).
Revised: Dwight Lowry (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997) was a professional baseball catcher who played for the Detroit Tigers and Minnesota Twins of Major League Baseball (MLB).
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Original: Dwight Lowry born Dwight Lowery (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997)  was a professional baseball catcher who played  for the Detroit Tigers  and Minnesota Twins of Major League Baseball (MLB).
Revised: Dwight Lowry born Dwight Lowery (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997) was a professional baseball catcher who played Major League Baseball for the Detroit Tigers and Minnesota Twins of Major League Baseball (MLB).
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Original:  Amateur career Born in Lumberton, North Carolina, Lowry attended the University of North Carolina earning a degree in Industrial Relations .
Revised:  Early years Lowry was born in Lumberton, North Carolina, Lowry attended the University of North Carolina earning a degree in Industrial Relations .
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Original:  Amateur career Born in Lumberton, North Carolina, Lowry attended the University of North Carolina earning a degree in Industrial Relations .
Revised:  Amateur career Born in Lumberton, North Carolina, Lowry attended the University of North Carolina earning a degree in industrial relations .
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Original:  He was drafted by the Detroit Tigers in the 11th round of the 1980 Major League Baseball draft.
Revised:  Professional baseball player Lowry was drafted by the Detroit Tigers in the 11th round of the 1980 Major League Baseball draft.
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Original:  Professional career Lowry made his major league debut with the 1984 Detroit Tigers team that began the season with a 35–5 record, won 104 games, and beat the San Diego Padres in the World Series.
Revised:  He made his major league debut with the 1984 Detroit Tigers team that began the season with a 35–5 record, won 104 games, and beat the San Diego Padres in the World Series.
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Original:  Lowry, two daughters (Sesilie Lowry and AmandaLowry) , and  one son (Zachary Lowry ).
Revised:  Lowry, two daughters (Sesilie Lowry and AmandaLowry) , and one son (Zachary ).
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Original:  In 1997, the Detroit Tigers renamed the Player Development Man of the Year Award to the Dwight Lowry Award in his honor.
Revised:  In 1997, the Detroit Tigers renamed the Player Development Man of the Year Award as the Dwight Lowry Award in his honor.
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Original: Dwight Lowry (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997), born Dwight Lowery was a professional baseball catcher who played  Major League Baseball for the Detroit Tigers (1984–1987) and Minnesota Twins (1988).
Revised: Dwight Lowry (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997), born Dwight Lowery was a professional baseball catcher who played in Major League Baseball for the Detroit Tigers (1984–1987) and Minnesota Twins (1988).
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Original: Dwight Lowry (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997), born Dwight Lowery was a professional baseball catcher who played in Major League Baseball for the Detroit Tigers (1984–1987) and Minnesota Twins (1988).
Revised: Dwight Lowry (October 23, 1957 – July 10, 1997), born Dwight Lowery was an American professional baseball catcher who played in Major League Baseball for the Detroit Tigers (1984–1987) and Minnesota Twins (1988).
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Original: Historiography and Historiophoty is the name of an essay by literary theorist of history Hayden White first published in 1988 in The American Historical Review.
Revised: Historiography and Historiophoty is the name of Hunter by literary theorist of history Hayden White first published in 1988 in The American Historical Review.
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