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Original:  Following their resistance against foreign authority, the Dagbamba tribesmen met and launched an attack on the heavily armed German Schutztruppe and Askari paramilitary police accompanying the Lieutenant Valentin von Massow on his way to their capital at the village of Adibo, who was sent by the German colonial administration to quell the rebellion.
Revised:  Following their resistance against foreign authority, the Dagbamba tribesmen met and launched an attack on the heavily armed German Schutztruppe and Askari paramilitary police accompanying the Lieutenant Valentin von Massow on his way to their capital at the village of Adibo, who had been sent by the German colonial administration to quell the rebellion.
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Original:  The Dagbamba fighters suffered many losses on the second day of the battle and yielded after their capital Yendi was razed to the ground on December 4 , 1896.
Revised:  The Dagbamba fighters suffered significant losses on the second day of the battle and yielded after their capital Yendi was razed to the ground on December 4 , 1896.
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Original:  The Dagbamba fighters suffered many losses on the second day of the battle and yielded after their capital Yendi was razed to the ground on December 4 , 1896.
Revised:  The Dagbamba fighters suffered many losses on the second day of the battle and yielded after their capital Yendi was razed to the ground on December 4 1896.
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Original:  Defeat of the Dagbamba enabled the Germany Empire to complete establishment of the Togoland protectorate  which encompassed the eastern part of the Kingdom of Dagbon.
Revised:  Defeat of the Dagbamba enabled the German Empire to complete establishment of the Togoland protectorate which encompassed the eastern part of the Kingdom of Dagbon.
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Original:  Defeat of the Dagbamba enabled the Germany Empire to complete establishment of the Togoland protectorate  which encompassed the eastern part of the Kingdom of Dagbon.
Revised:  Defeat of the Dagbamba enabled the Germany Empire to complete establishing the Togoland protectorate which encompassed the eastern part of the Kingdom of Dagbon.
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Original:  Defeat of the Dagbamba enabled the Germany Empire to complete establishment of the Togoland protectorate  which encompassed the eastern part of the Kingdom of Dagbon.
Revised:  Defeat of the Dagbamba enabled the Germany Empire to complete establishment of the Togoland protectorate , which encompassed the eastern part of the Kingdom of Dagbon.
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Original:  The western part of the Kingdom was released to the British to be included in the British empire .
Revised:  The western part of the Kingdom was released to the British and incorporated into the British Empire .
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Original:  Written accounts of the incursion are generally related from the personal letters and diaries of Valentine von Massow to his mother, and from his official reports addressed to the Governor of Lome under the colonial department of the ministry of foreign affairs in Berlin.
Revised:  Written accounts of the incursion primarily come from the personal letters and diaries of Valentine von Massow to his mother, and from his official reports addressed to the Governor of Lome under the colonial department of the ministry of foreign affairs in Berlin.
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Original:  Written accounts of the incursion are generally related from the personal letters and diaries of Valentine von Massow to his mother, and from his official reports addressed to the Governor of Lome under the colonial department of the ministry of foreign affairs in Berlin.
Revised:  Written accounts of the incursion are generally related from the personal letters and diaries of von Massow to his mother, and from his official reports addressed to the Governor of Lome under the colonial department of the ministry of foreign affairs in Berlin.
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Original:  Written accounts of the incursion are generally related from the personal letters and diaries of Valentine von Massow to his mother, and from his official reports addressed to the Governor of Lome under the colonial department of the ministry of foreign affairs in Berlin.
Revised:  Written accounts of the incursion are generally related from the personal letters and diaries of Valentine von Massow to his mother, as well as his official reports addressed to the Governor of Lome under the colonial department of the ministry of foreign affairs in Berlin.
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Original:  Written accounts of the incursion are generally related from the personal letters and diaries of Valentine von Massow to his mother, and from his official reports addressed to the Governor of Lome under the colonial department of the ministry of foreign affairs in Berlin.
Revised:  Written accounts of the incursion are generally related from the personal letters and diaries of Valentine von Massow to his mother, and from his official reports addressed to the Governor of Lome under the colonial department of the Ministry of Foreign Affairs in Berlin.
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Original:  On the other hand, Dagbaŋ drummer storytellers have mostly been responsible for relating the event;
Revised:  Dagbaŋ drummer storytellers have mostly been responsible for relating the event;
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Original:  their narrative being slightly different , is almost always transmitted orally . Background Before 1850, German missionaries were firmly rooted among the southern tribes of present day Ghana and Togo  but Germany first established a formal protectorate along the coast of West Africa on July 5 , 1884.
Revised:  their narrative being slightly different , is almost always transmitted orally . Background Before 1850, German missionaries had become well-established among the southern tribes of present day Ghana and Togo but Germany first established a formal protectorate along the coast of West Africa on July 5 , 1884.
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Original:  their narrative being slightly different , is almost always transmitted orally . Background Before 1850, German missionaries were firmly rooted among the southern tribes of present day Ghana and Togo  but Germany first established a formal protectorate along the coast of West Africa on July 5 , 1884.
Revised:  their narrative being slightly different , is almost always transmitted orally . Background Before 1850, German missionaries were firmly rooted among the southern tribes of present day Ghana and Togo , but Germany first established a formal protectorate along the coast of West Africa on July 5 , 1884.
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Original:  their narrative being slightly different , is almost always transmitted orally . Background Before 1850, German missionaries were firmly rooted among the southern tribes of present day Ghana and Togo  but Germany first established a formal protectorate along the coast of West Africa on July 5 , 1884.
Revised:  their narrative being slightly different , is almost always transmitted orally . Background Before 1850, German missionaries were firmly rooted among the southern tribes of present day Ghana and Togo but Germany first established a formal protectorate along the coast of West Africa on July 5 1884.
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Original:  They continued their advances northwards and from 1884 established the Togoland protectorate as a discontiguous part of the Deutsch-Westafrika protectorate that included Cameroon.
Revised:  They continued their advance northwards and from 1884 established the Togoland protectorate as a discontiguous part of the Deutsch-Westafrika protectorate that included Cameroon.
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Original:  They continued their advances northwards and from 1884 established the Togoland protectorate as a discontiguous part of the Deutsch-Westafrika protectorate that included Cameroon.
Revised:  They continued their advances northwards and from 1884 established the Togoland protectorate as a discontinuous part of the Deutsch-Westafrika protectorate that included Cameroon.
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Original:  Their advances was influenced by the need to expand agricultural plantations, road and railway lines;
Revised:  Their advance was influenced by the need to expand agricultural plantations, road and railway lines;
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Original:  and to exact forced labor for those purposes.
Revised:  and to exact forced labour for those purposes.
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Original:  Factors that facilitated their movement into the hinterlands included the construction of a port at Lomé, installation of the Kamina Funkstation radio communications transmitter, and the little resistance posed by the tribes they encountered such as the Ewe people, who mostly settled as fragmented clans.
Revised:  Factors that facilitated their movement into the hinterlands included the construction of a port at Lomé, installation of the Kamina Funkstation radio communications transmitter, and the minimal resistance posed by the tribes they encountered such as the Ewe people, who mostly settled as fragmented clans.
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Original:  By 1890, the German expeditions had ventured into the savanna regions of present day Ghana and Togo, where they encountered the rather formidable Dagbamba warriors.
Revised:  By 1890, the German expeditions had ventured into the savanna regions of present day Ghana and Togo, where they encountered the more formidable Dagbamba warriors.
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Original:  His father was Urbano Macapagal y Romero (c. 1887 – 1946), a poet who wrote in the local Pampangan language and his mother was Romana Pangan  Macapagal, daughter of Atanacio Miguel Pangan (a former cabeza de barangay of Gutad, Floridablanca, Pampanga) and Lorenza Suing Antiveros.
Revised:  His father was Urbano Macapagal y Romero (c. 1887 – 1946), a poet who wrote in the local Pampangan language and his mother was Romana Pangan de Macapagal, daughter of Atanacio Miguel Pangan (a former cabeza de barangay of Gutad, Floridablanca, Pampanga) and Lorenza Suing Antiveros.
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Original:  His father was Urbano Macapagal y Romero (c. 1887 – 1946), a poet who wrote in the local Pampangan language and his mother was Romana Pangan  Macapagal, daughter of Atanacio Miguel Pangan (a former cabeza de barangay of Gutad, Floridablanca, Pampanga) and Lorenza Suing Antiveros.
Revised:  His father was Urbano Macapagal y Romero (c. 1887 – 1946), a poet who wrote in the local Pampangan language and his mother was Romana Pangan Macapagal, daughter of Atanacio Pangan y Miguel (a former cabeza de barangay of Gutad, Floridablanca, Pampanga) and Lorenza Suing Antiveros.
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Original:  His father was Urbano Macapagal y Romero (c. 1887 – 1946), a poet who wrote in the local Pampangan language and his mother was Romana Pangan de Macapagal , daughter of Atanacio Pangan y Miguel (a former cabeza de barangay of Gutad, Floridablanca, Pampanga) and Lorenza Suing Antiveros.
Revised:  His father was Urbano Macapagal y Romero (c. 1887 – 1946), a poet who wrote in the local Pampangan language and his mother was Romana Pangan y Antiveros , daughter of Atanacio Pangan y Miguel (a former cabeza de barangay of Gutad, Floridablanca, Pampanga) and Lorenza Suing Antiveros.
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Original:  Urbano's mother, Escolástica Romero Macapagal, was a midwife and schoolteacher who taught catechism.
Revised:  Urbano's mother, Escolastica Romero Macapagal, was a midwife and schoolteacher who taught catechism.
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Original: Vice presidency In the  1957 general election , the Liberal Party drafted Representative Macapagal to run for vice president as the running-mate of José  Yulo, a former Speaker of the House of Representatives.
Revised: Vice presidency In the 1957 general elections , the Liberal Party drafted Representative Macapagal to run for vice president as the running-mate of José Yulo, a former Speaker of the House of Representatives.
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Original: Vice presidency In the  1957 general election , the Liberal Party drafted Representative Macapagal to run for vice president as the running-mate of José  Yulo, a former Speaker of the House of Representatives.
Revised: Vice presidency In the 1957 general election , the Liberal Party drafted Congressman Macapagal to run for vice president as the running-mate of José Yulo, a former Speaker of the House of Representatives.
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Original: Vice presidency In the  1957 general election , the Liberal Party drafted Representative Macapagal to run for vice president as the running-mate of José  Yulo, a former Speaker of the House of Representatives.
Revised: Vice presidency In the 1957 general election , the Liberal Party drafted Representative Macapagal to run for vice president as the running-mate of José Y. Yulo, a former Speaker of the House of Representatives.
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Original:  A month after the election, he was also chosen as the head of the Liberal Party.
Revised:  A month after the election, he was chosen as the head of the Liberal Party.
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Original:  A month after the election, he was also chosen as the head of the Liberal Party.
Revised:  A month after the election, he was also chosen as the president of the Liberal Party.
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Original:  Due to his roots in poverty, Macapagal would later become affectionately known as the "Poor Boy from Lubao".
Revised:  YOUR A DUM DUM Macapagal would later become affectionately known as the "Poor Boy from Lubao".
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Original:  YOUR A DUM DUM Macapagal would later become affectionately known as the "Poor Boy from Lubao".
Revised:  Due to his roots in poverty, Macapagal would later become affectionately known as the "Poor Boy from Lubao".
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Original:  Unlike in PAH1 in which aldosterone resistance is present, in PAH2 the volume expansion leads to relatively low aldosterone levels.
Revised:  Unlike in PHA1 in which aldosterone resistance is present, in PAH2 the volume expansion leads to relatively low aldosterone levels.
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Original:  Unlike in PAH1 in which aldosterone resistance is present, in PAH2 the volume expansion leads to relatively low aldosterone levels.
Revised:  Unlike in PAH1 in which aldosterone resistance is present, in PHA2 the volume expansion leads to relatively low aldosterone levels.
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Original:  There is Pawana lake at the summit.
Revised:  There is good view of Pawana lake from the summit.
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Original:  A small battle was fought by Maratha army with British in 1818, before it was captured by the later .
Revised:  A small battle was fought by Maratha army with British in 1818, before it was captured by the latter .
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Original:  Trek organisers also commend the views of Pawna dam and the nearby forts of Tung, Lohagad and Visapur<ref>Visit this pyramid shaped hill fort near URL There is good view of Pawana lake from the summit.
Revised:  Trek organisers also commend the views of Pawna dam and the nearby forts of Tung, Lohagad and VisapurVisit this pyramid shaped hill fort near URL There is good view of Pawana lake from the summit.
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Original: Tourism In recent years, areas surrounding Tikon fort and Pawna Lake Reservoir have seen rapid rise in tourism due to the waterbody ’ s proximity to Lonavala hill station and forts such as Lohagad and Tung.
Revised: Tourism In recent years, areas surrounding tikona fort Pawna lake Reservoir have seen rapid rise in tourism due to the waterbody ’ s proximity to Lonavala hill station and forts such as Lohagad and Tung.
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Original: Tourism In recent years, areas surrounding Tikon fort and Pawna Lake Reservoir have seen rapid rise in tourism due to the waterbody ’ s proximity to Lonavala hill station and forts such as Lohagad and Tung.
Revised: Tourism In recent years, areas surrounding Tikon fort and Pawna Lake Reservoir have seen rapid rise in tourism due to the waterbody ' s proximity to Lonavala hill station and forts such as Lohagad and Tung.
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Original:  Various camping-site businesses have been started around the Pawna Lake .
Revised:  Various camping-site businesses have been started around the Pawna lake .
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Original:  Tikon fort is attracts visitors mainly from the two major neighboring cities of Pune and Mumbai.
Revised:  Tikon fort is attrects visitors mainly from the two major neighboring cities of Pune and Mumbai.
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Original:  Tikon fort is attracts visitors mainly from the two major neighboring cities of Pune and Mumbai.
Revised:  Tikon fort is attracts visitors mainly from the two major neighoring cities of Pune and Mumbai.
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Original:  Around 4,500 people from these two cities visit the lake  every weekend.
Revised:  Aroung 4,500 people from these two cities visit the lake every weekend.
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Original:  Around 4,500 people from these two cities visit the lake  every weekend.
Revised:  Around 4,500 people comes from thses two cities visit the lake every weekend.
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Original:  Best Camping in Pawna lake
Revised:  Best Camping in Pawna Lake.
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Original:  Gallery Category:Buildings and structures of the Maratha Empire Category:Forts in Pune district Category:16th-century forts in India Category:Buildings and structures in Maharashtra Category:Hiking trails in India * Category: Hiking Nature Of Pawn
Revised:  Gallery Category:Buildings and structures of the Maratha Empire Category:Forts in Pune district Category:16th-century forts in India Category:Buildings and structures in Maharashtra Category:Hiking trails in India * Category: Hiki
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Original:  The 3500 ft high hill is pyramidal in shape and the name Tikona means "triangular".
Revised:  The 3500 foot high hill is pyramidal in shape and the name Tikona means "triangular".
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Original:  The fort is a trekking destination noted for the large doors, the temple of 'Trimbakeshwar Mahadev', a water tanks (seven water tanks)  and some Satvahan caves.
Revised:  The fort is a trekking destination noted for the large doors, the temple of 'Trimbakeshwar Mahadev', seven water tanks (seven water tanks) and some Satvahan caves.
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Original:  The fort is a trekking destination noted for the large doors, the temple of 'Trimbakeshwar Mahadev', a water tanks (seven water tanks)  and some Satvahan caves.
Revised:  The fort is a trekking destination noted for the large doors, the temple of 'Trimbakeshwar Mahadev', a water tanks (seven water tanks) , and some Satvahan caves.
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Original: Visit this pyramid shaped hill fort near URL There is  good view of Pawana lake from the summit.
Revised: Visit this pyramid-shaped hill fort near URL There is good view of Pawana lake from the summit.
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Original: Visit this pyramid shaped hill fort near URL There is  good view of Pawana lake from the summit.
Revised: Visit this pyramid shaped hill fort near URL There is a good view of Pawana lake from the summit.
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Original: It was under the Dhamale Deshmukh family for  long time.
Revised: It was under the Dhamale Deshmukh family for a long time.
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Original:  After the meeting the Akbar was offered to stay on Tikona fort, however  he was shifted to Jaitapur as the climate didn't suit him.
Revised:  After the meeting the Akbar was offered to stay on Tikona fort, however , he was shifted to Jaitapur as the climate didn't suit him.
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Original:  A small battle was fought by  Maratha army with  British in 1818 , before it was captured by the latter.
Revised:  A small battle was fought by the Maratha army with British in 1818 , before it was captured by the latter.
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Original:  A small battle was fought by  Maratha army with  British in 1818 , before it was captured by the latter.
Revised:  A small battle was fought by Maratha army with the British in 1818 , before it was captured by the latter.
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Original:  A small battle was fought by  Maratha army with  British in 1818 , before it was captured by the latter.
Revised:  A small battle was fought by Maratha army with British in 1818 before it was captured by the latter.
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Original:  There is very less space on the fort.
Revised:  There is very little space in the fort.
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Original:  The Bedse caves which are on the way from Kamshet can also be visited on the way to Tikona on the same dayHow to reavh Tikona URL
Revised:  The Bedse caves which are on the way from Kamshet can also be visited on the way to Tikona on the same dayHow to reach Tikona URL
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Original:  Immediately after, Andrei Varankow had his penalty saved by Zainol Gulam to leave DPMM in fourth place   .
Revised:  Immediately after, Andrei Varankow had his penalty saved by Zainol Gulam to leave DPMM in fourth place . .
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Original: Haimie Anak Nyaring (born 31 May 1998) is a Bruneian footballer of Iban descent who plays for MS PDB of the Brunei Super League as a goalkeeper.
Revised: Haimie Anak Nyaring (born 31 May 1998) is a Bruneian footballer of Iban descent who plays as a goalkeeper.
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Original:  Haimie left DPMM for MS PDB, the football team of the Royal Brunei Police Force , at the start of the 2020 Brunei Super League .
Revised:  Haimie left DPMM at the start of 2020 to start a career with the Royal Brunei Police Force , at the start of the 2020 Brunei Super League .
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Original:  Haimie left DPMM for MS PDB, the football team of the Royal Brunei Police Force , at the start of the 2020 Brunei Super League .
Revised:  Haimie left DPMM for MS PDB, the football team of the Royal Brunei Police Force .
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Original:  He rejoined the side in June the following year before the 2021 Brunei Super League commences .
Revised:  He rejoined the side in June the following year before the 2021 Brunei Super League commenced .
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Original:  PhD Thesis, ResearchSpace@ Auckland, 1990.
Revised:  MSc Thesis, ResearchSpace@ Auckland, 1990.
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Original:  They are of Ngāti Porou, Ngāi Tahu, Native Hawaiian, Cook Island Māori, and Sāmoan descent and are currently a full professor of Language Revitalisation at the Auckland University of Technology.
Revised:  She is of Ngāti Porou, Ngāi Tahu, Native Hawaiian, Cook Island Māori, and Sāmoan descent and are currently a full professor of Language Revitalisation at the Auckland University of Technology.
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Original:  They are of Ngāti Porou, Ngāi Tahu, Native Hawaiian, Cook Island Māori, and Sāmoan descent and are currently a full professor of Language Revitalisation at the Auckland University of Technology.
Revised:  They are of Ngāti Porou, Ngāi Tahu, Native Hawaiian, Cook Island Māori, and Sāmoan descent and is a full professor of Language Revitalisation at the Auckland University of Technology.
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Original: A 1995 education PhD from the University of Waikato  titled ' Te tātari i te kaupapa' , looked at ways the New Zealand qualifications framework could be used as a tool for indigenous knowledge to be integrated and recognised as a valid part of the education system in New Zealand After working at the University of Otago, Ka'ai moved to the Auckland University of Technology with John Moorfield.
Revised: Ka'ai earned a 1995 education PhD from the University of Waikato titled ' Te tātari i te kaupapa' , looked at ways the New Zealand qualifications framework could be used as a tool for indigenous knowledge to be integrated and recognised as a valid part of the education system in New Zealand After working at the University of Otago, Ka'ai moved to the Auckland University of Technology with John Moorfield.
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