wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
Revised: 137 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
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Original: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
Revised: 137 8 switzerland 128 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
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Original: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
Revised: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
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Original: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
Revised: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
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Original: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
Revised: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
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Original: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
Revised: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
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Original: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
Revised: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
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Original: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 20 ukraine 30 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
Revised: 137 8 switzerland 128 9 norway 125%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 10 denmark 125 11 croatia 115%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 12 hungary 97 13 turkey 92%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 14 bosniaherzegovina 79 15 russia 57%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 16 albania 53 17 fyrmacedonia 52%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 18 cyprus 46 19 sweden 30%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 21 spain 28%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 22 unitedkingdom 18 23 france 11%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 24 germany 4
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Original: Finaly , it's important to note that English is more used than native language since the rule changes and permits the singer to perform in any language he wants.
Revised: Finally , it's important to note that English is more used than native language since the rule changes and permits the singer to perform in any language he wants.
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Original: Finaly , it's important to note that English is more used than native language since the rule changes and permits the singer to perform in any language he wants.
Revised: Finaly , it's important to note most countries now choose to sing in English rather than their native language, since the rule changes and permits the singer to perform in any language he wants.
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Original: Finaly , it's important to note that English is more used than native language since the rule changes and permits the singer to perform in any language he wants.
Revised: Finaly , it's important to note that English is more used than native language since the rule changes permit the singer to perform in any language he wants.
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Original:  Final Scores +Final Scores Rank Country Total Points 1 Greece 230 2 Malta 192 3 Romania 158 4 Israel 154 5 Latvia 153 6Moldova 148 7 Serbiamontenegro 1378Switzerland1289Norway12510Denmark12511Croatia11512Hungary9713Turkey9214BosniaHerzegovina7915Russia5716Albania5317Fyrmacedonia5218Cyprus4619Sweden3020Ukraine3021Spain2822United-Kingdom1823France1124Germany4 & 
Revised:  Final Scores +Final Scores Rank Country Total Points 1 Greece 230 2 Malta 192 3 Romania 158 4 Israel 154 5 Latvia 153 6Moldova 148 7 Serbiamontenegro 1378Switzerland1289Norway12510Denmark12511Croatia11512Hungary9713Turkey9214BosniaHerzegovina7915Russia5716Albania5317Fyrmacedonia5218Cyprus4619Sweden3020Ukraine3021Spain2822United-Kingdom1823France1124Germany4 Montenegro 1378Switzerland1289Norway12510Denmark12511Croatia11512Hungary9713Turkey9214Bosnia& 
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Original: Light Electric Vehicle (LEV) will become a trendy product with the environment issue still undergoes .
Revised: Light Electric Vehicle (LEV) will become a trendy product with respect to environmentalists .
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Original:  Zhong Hua Niu Bian  contains sildenafil and glibenclamide.
Revised:  Zhong Hua Niu Bian also contains sildenafil and glibenclamide.
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Original: Veteran NASCAR Nextel Cup driver Mark Martin took the checkered flag at Lowe' s Motor Speedway in Charlotte, North Carolina earlier today, winning  the All-Star Challenge race and collecting over $1 million US  . Martin, who won the same race back in 1998, also became the 5th driver to ever win multiple all-star races.
Revised: Veteran NASCAR Nextel Cup Series started with controversy and ended with a popular victory for one of the sports' veterans. the All-Star Challenge race and collecting over $1 million US . Martin, who won the same race back in 1998, also became the 5th driver to ever win multiple all-star races.
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Original: Veteran NASCAR Nextel Cup driver Mark Martin took the checkered flag at Lowe' s Motor Speedway in Charlotte, North Carolina earlier today, winning  the All-Star Challenge race and collecting over $1 million US  . Martin, who won the same race back in 1998, also became the 5th driver to ever win multiple all-star races.
Revised: Veteran NASCAR Nextel Cup driver Mark Martin took the checkered flag at Lowe' s Motor Speedway in Charlotte, North Carolina earlier today, winning the All-Star Challenge race and collecting over $1 million US . 
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Original:  The only thing, I wish I would have turned right and wrecked (him)." 2004 Busch Series champion Martin Truex, Jr. finished tenth in the Open, but won the fan vote to get into the All-Star Challenge     
Revised:  The only thing, I wish I would have turned right and wrecked (him)." 2004 Busch Series champion Martin Truex, Jr. finished tenth in the Open, but won the fan vote to get into the All-Star Challenge . 
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Original: Taiwan IT Solution Pavilion 2008 Taipei AMPA. 2008 Taipei AMPA, not only showcased automotive parts and accessories, but there were also several seminars in progress at the TWTC Nangang.
Revised: Taiwan IT Solution Pavilion 2008 2008 Taipei AMPA, not only showcased automotive parts and accessories, but there were also several seminars in progress at the TWTC Nangang.
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Original: Taiwan IT Solution Pavilion 2008 Taipei AMPA. 2008 Taipei AMPA, not only showcased automotive parts and accessories, but there were also several seminars in progress at the TWTC Nangang.
Revised: Taiwan IT Solution Pavilion 2008 Taipei AMPA. Taipei AMPA, not only showcased automotive parts and accessories, but there were also several seminars in progress at the TWTC Nangang.
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Original:  Applications from RFID will be suitable for the other non-IT industries.
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Original:  In addition, the "Taiwan IT Solution Pavilion", organized by IT industry including w: Industrial Technology Research Institute | and the other 14 companies, showcased not only solutions for automotive industry including manufacturing, e-commerce, and logistic managament, but also industrial applications like RFID, Barcode, and ERP.
Revised:  In addition, the "Taiwan IT Solution Pavilion", organized by IT industry including Industrial Technology Research Institute | and the other 14 companies, showcased not only solutions for automotive industry including manufacturing, e-commerce, and logistic managament, but also industrial applications like RFID, Barcode, and ERP.
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Original:  In addition, the "Taiwan IT Solution Pavilion", organized by IT industry including w: Industrial Technology Research Institute | and the other 14 companies, showcased not only solutions for automotive industry including manufacturing, e-commerce, and logistic managament, but also industrial applications like RFID, Barcode, and ERP.
Revised:  In addition, the "Taiwan IT Solution Pavilion", organized by IT industry including w: Industrial Technology Research Institute and the other 14 companies, showcased not only solutions for automotive industry including manufacturing, e-commerce, and logistic managament, but also industrial applications like RFID, Barcode, and ERP.
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Original:  According to Agence France-Presse, officials have reported 45 people dead in Nyanza province, 12 in Northeastern province and seven in Rift Valley province.
Revised:  According to Agence France-Presse, officials have reported 45 people dead in Nyanza province, 12 in North eastern province and seven in Rift Valley province.
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Original:  Health officials have stated that the actual number of deaths due to the outbreak could be higher due to underreporting .
Revised:  Health officials have stated that the actual number of deaths due to the outbreak could be higher due to under reporting .
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Original:  Medicines worth KSh17.3 million ( GBP2.4 million) and other equipment worth KSh700,000 ( GBP5 ,700) has been sent to the affected areas.
Revised:  Medicines worth KSh17.3 million ( GBP 2.4 million) and other equipment worth KSh700,000 ( GBP5 ,700) has been sent to the affected areas.
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Original:  Medicines worth KSh17.3 million ( GBP2.4 million) and other equipment worth KSh700,000 ( GBP5 ,700) has been sent to the affected areas.
Revised:  Medicines worth KSh17.3 million ( GBP2.4 million) and other equipment worth KSh700,000 ( GBP 5 ,700) has been sent to the affected areas.
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Original:  The Kenyan government has allocated KSh38 million ( GBP11.75 million) to contain the outbreak.
Revised:  The Kenyan government has allocated KSh38 million ( GBP 11.75 million) to contain the outbreak.
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Original:  The Australian Consumers Association spokesman Christopher Zinn said the unique use of PayPal could give rise to competition issues, however if the costs charged stayed as they were, they had no further concerns  
Revised:  The Australian Consumers Association spokesman Christopher Zinn said the unique use of PayPal could give rise to competition issues, however if the costs charged stayed as they were, they had no further concerns . 
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Original:  The Australian Consumers Association spokesman Christopher Zinn said the unique use of PayPal could give rise to competition issues, however if the costs charged stayed as they were, they had no further concerns. fuck paypal you all are assholes you guys in ebay austraila are brain failures dumb asssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Revised:  The Australian Consumers Association spokesman Christopher Zinn said the unique use of PayPal could give rise to competition issues, however if the costs charged stayed as they were, they had no further concerns. 
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Original:  The UK government announced yesterday that the British mathematician and computer pioneer would be posthumously pardoned for his 61-year-old "gross indecency" conviction.
Revised:  The UK government announced yesterday the British mathematician and computer pioneer would be posthumously pardoned for his 61-year-old "gross indecency" conviction.
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Original:  At , Turing had worked on breaking the "Enigma" code used by the Nazis during World War II .
Revised:  At , Turing had worked on breaking the used by the Nazis during World War II .
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Original:  At , Turing had worked on breaking the "Enigma" code used by the Nazis during World War II .
Revised:  At , Turing had worked on breaking the "Enigma" code used by the Nazis during .
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Original:  In 1952, Turing was convicted of gross indecency after he had a relationship with another man .
Revised:  In 1952, Turing was convicted of gross indecency after he had .
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Original:  An inquest found that he'd committed suicide, but some dispute this and believe it was an accident.
Revised:  An inquest found he'd committed suicide, but some dispute this and believe it was an accident.
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Original:  His brilliance was put into practice at Bletchley Park during the Second World War where he was pivotal to breaking the Enigma code, helping to end the war and save thousands of lives. "
Revised:  His brilliance was put into practice at Bletchley Park during the Second World War where he was pivotal to breaking the Enigma code, helping to end the war and save thousands of lives. 
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Original:  Prime Minister  said: "Alan Turing was a remarkable man who played a key role in saving this country in World War Two by cracking the German Enigma code.
Revised:  Prime Minister David Cameron said: "Alan Turing was a remarkable man who played a key role in saving this country in World War Two by cracking the German Enigma code.
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Original: AN-32 in fire (Screen from PRO TV Chisinau) A Kata Air Transport (Sudan) Antonov AN-32 crashed at 19.15 GMT on approach to Chisinau International Airport in Moldova, presumably killing all eight (8) aboard.
Revised:  A Kata Air Transport (Sudan) Antonov AN-32 crashed at 19.15 GMT on approach to Chisinau International Airport in Moldova, presumably killing all eight (8) aboard.
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Original: Transport plane AN-32 has been developed in 1977, in 1984 came in exploitation.
Revised: The AN-32 has been developed in 1977, in 1984 came in exploitation.
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Original:   AN-32 can transport up to 42 parachuters.
Revised:  The AN-32 can transport up to 42 parachuters.
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Original:   María Teresa Fernández de la Vega was reappointed deputy prime minister.
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Original: Zapatero was sworn in at a brief ceremony in Zarazuela Palace.
Revised: Zapatero was sworn in at a brief ceremony in Zarzuela Palace.
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Original:  Bibiana Aido was named head of the new Equality Ministry.
Revised:  Bibiana Aído was named head of the new Equality Ministry.
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Original: 250px|Zapatero, seen here with supporters.
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Original:  Refugees have been living in the camp as a result of the conflict in Sudan's Darfur region .
Revised:  Refugees have been living in the camp as a result of the conflict in the Darfur region of Sudan .
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Original:  ]] The fire started in the Goz Amer camp due to a cooking fire that had gone unwatched.
Revised:  ]] The fire started in the Goz Amer camp triggered by a cooking fire that had gone unwatched.
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Original: November 18, USA - According to an article posted at Slashdot and Reuters, William Henry Gates III or just Bill Gates, Microsoft founder, receives up to four million emails a day, and he is probably the most spammed man in the world .
Revised: November 18, USA - William Henry Gates III or just Bill Gates, Microsoft founder, receives up to four million emails a day, and he is probably the most spammed man in the world .
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Original:  Because revolutions on Web 3.0 era made a major impact on global economy, several elites from Internet industry like Kai-Fu Lee did forecasts on this key industry in this forum.
Revised:  Because revolutions in the Web 3.0 era made a major impact on global economy, several elites from Internet industry like Kai-Fu Lee did forecasts on this key industry in this forum.
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Original: "2008 Boao Forum for Asia" , participated with governmental and industrial executives world-wide, started two days ago in Bo'ao, Hainan, China  .
Revised: "2008 Boao Forum for Asia" started two days ago in Bo'ao, Hainan, China .
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Original: "2008 Boao Forum for Asia" , participated with governmental and industrial executives world-wide, started two days ago in Bo'ao, Hainan, China  .
Revised: "2008 Boao Forum for Asia" , participated with governmental and industrial executives world-wide, started two days ago in Bo'ao, Hainan, China , and participated with government and industrial executives world-wide .
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Original:  By the way, after the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Election, Vincent Siew, the vice-president-to-be, focused by media world-wide including Taiwan, participated in this forumwith non-official identity .
Revised:  Furthermore, Vincent Siew, the vice-president-to-be, focused by media world-wide including Taiwan, participated in this forumwith non-official identity .
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Original:  By the way, after the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Election, Vincent Siew, the vice-president-to-be, focused by media world-wide including Taiwan, participated in this forumwith non-official identity .
Revised:  By the way, after the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Election, Vincent Siew, the vice-president elect, provided his comments in the forum .
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Original:  For example, industrial and academical units promoted several energy-efficiency policies, parts and accessories, and products in three recently-closed trade shows ( Taipei AMPA, AutoTronics Taipei, Motorcycle Taiwan ) located at TWTC and TWTC Nangang with the international environmental laws and policies promoted in several nations including Taiwan.
Revised:  For example, industrial and academical units promoted several energy-efficiency policies, parts and accessories, and products in three recently-closed trade shows ( AutoTronics Taipei, Motorcycle Taiwan ) located at TWTC and TWTC Nangang with the international environmental laws and policies promoted in several nations including Taiwan.
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Original: People involved in open source products from across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference to present to others a variety of research which is relevant to the open source community.
Revised: People involved in open source products from across Taiwan gathered together at the 2008 Taiwan Open Source Development Conference to present a variety of research which is relevant to the open source community.
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