wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Thus, Noguchi said that people with  Upwards and Downwards category are least wild and like xian / sennin / hsien (in Taoism  , Xian is believed to live in  high mountain, or in heaven , be immortal , and have some magical power.
Revised:  Thus, Noguchi said that people with Upwards and Downwards category are least wild and like xian / sennin / hsien (in Taoism ) , Xian is believed to live in high mountain, or in heaven , be immortal , and have some magical power.
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Original:  Thus, Noguchi said that people with  Upwards and Downwards category are least wild and like xian / sennin / hsien (in Taoism  , Xian is believed to live in  high mountain, or in heaven , be immortal , and have some magical power.
Revised:  Thus, Noguchi said that people with Upwards and Downwards category are least wild and like xian / sennin / hsien (in Taoism , Xian is believed to live in a high mountain, or in heaven , be immortal , and have some magical power.
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Original:  Thus, Noguchi said that people with  Upwards and Downwards category are least wild and like xian / sennin / hsien (in Taoism  , Xian is believed to live in  high mountain, or in heaven , be immortal , and have some magical power.
Revised:  Thus, Noguchi said that people with Upwards and Downwards category are least wild and like xian / sennin / hsien (in Taoism , Xian is believed to live in high mountain, or heaven immortal and have some magical power.
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Original:  By this simile, Noguchi meant that people of these taiheki are like living in imaginary world with  overview of the real world).
Revised:  Noguchi meant that people of these taiheki are like living in imaginary world with overview of the real world).
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Original:  By this simile, Noguchi meant that people of these taiheki are like living in imaginary world with  overview of the real world).
Revised:  By this simile, Noguchi meant that people of these Taiheki live in an imaginary world with overview of the real world).
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Original:  By this simile, Noguchi meant that people of these taiheki are like living in imaginary world with  overview of the real world).
Revised:  By this simile, Noguchi meant that people of these taiheki are like living in imaginary world with an overview of the real world).
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Original:  Taiheki type 1 has a strong tendency of sublimating surplus energy into  intellectual activity.
Revised:  Taiheki type 1 has a strong tendency of cerebral sublimating of surplus energy into intellectual activity.
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Original:  Taiheki type 1 has a strong tendency of sublimating surplus energy into  intellectual activity.
Revised:  Taiheki type 1 has a strong tendency of sublimating surplus energy into the intellectual activity.
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Original:   People with this taiheki always try to understand the world linguistically.
Revised:  They turn their energy into thoughts. They are sympathetic and left-brain dominant. They tend to have naturally curly hair. They have a long face and a broad forehead. When they walk, they do not lift their knees high, and their steps are wide. They stretch upwards when surprised. They like to read and are happy to increase their knowledge. They like to know the meaning of words they have never heard before. They like history, philosophy, etc. They come up with many ideas, so they talk in the order in which they come up with them, and the topics change rapidly. They talk without reading between the lines and talk about difficult things. They know a lot, and when you ask them about something, they start with its history and go on and on about it. They do not get angry if you interrupt them. They can answer a question out of the blue and are very good at improvising. They are always calm but blush easily when they are embarrassed. They make up systems and rules and get angry when these are broken. When they look up and give a blank look, they are daydreaming. People with this taiheki always try to understand the world linguistically.
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Original:   People with this taiheki always try to understand the world linguistically.
Revised:  People with this Taiheki always try to understand the world linguistically.
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Original:  That is to say,  they have an intense motivation to understand everything by explaining it with his own words.
Revised:  That is to say, and they have an intense motivation to understand everything by explaining it with his own words.
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Original:  That is to say,  they have an intense motivation to understand everything by explaining it with his own words.
Revised:  That is to say, they have an intense motivation to understand everything by explaining it in their own words.
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Original:  When you need to scold a person with taiheki type 1, Noguchi recommended to say things shortly to encourage his/her own thinking.
Revised:  When you need to scold a person with Taiheki type 1, Noguchi recommended to say things shortly to encourage his/her own thinking.
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Original:  When you need to scold a person with taiheki type 1, Noguchi recommended to say things shortly to encourage his/her own thinking.
Revised:  When you need to scold a person with taiheki type 1, Noguchi recommended saying things shortly to encourage his/her own thinking.
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Original:  When you need to scold a person with taiheki type 1, Noguchi recommended to say things shortly to encourage his/her own thinking.
Revised:  When you need to scold a person with taiheki type 1, Noguchi recommended to say things shortly to encourage his/her thinking.
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Original:   It is said that most men have taiheki type 1 to some extent, and many characteristics accepted to be typical of men can thus be understood as a part of features of taiheki type 1.
Revised:  It is said that most men have Taiheki type 1 to some extent, and many characteristics accepted to be typical of men can thus be understood as a part of features of taiheki type 1.
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Original:  Differed from taiheki type 1, people with taiheki 2 are passive.
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Original:  They feel difficulty in taking action under their own responsibility and decision, while they feel  ease when taking action according to opinions of, or under  responsibility of, others.
Revised:  They feel difficulty taking action under their own responsibility and decision, while they feel ease when taking action according to opinions of, or under responsibility of, others.
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Original:  They feel difficulty in taking action under their own responsibility and decision, while they feel  ease when taking action according to opinions of, or under  responsibility of, others.
Revised:  They feel difficulty in taking action under their responsibility and decision, while they feel ease when taking action according to opinions of, or under responsibility of, others.
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Original:  They feel difficulty in taking action under their own responsibility and decision, while they feel  ease when taking action according to opinions of, or under  responsibility of, others.
Revised:  They feel difficulty in taking action under their own responsibility and decision, while they feel at ease when taking action according to opinions of, or under responsibility of, others.
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Original:  They feel difficulty in taking action under their own responsibility and decision, while they feel  ease when taking action according to opinions of, or under  responsibility of, others.
Revised:  They feel difficulty in taking action under their own responsibility and decision, while they feel ease when taking action according to opinions of, or under the responsibility of, others.
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Original: upright=1.4|Degraded forest in Lahnberge, Germany: the soil is being washed out due to lack of vegetal cover, some trees are losing ground and they appear to be sick (photo by Andreas Trepte).
Revised: upright=1.4|Degraded forest in Lahnberge, Germany: the soil is being washed out due to lack of vegetal cover, some trees are loshiiing ground and they appear to be sick (photo by Andreas Trepte).
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Original:  "This does not involve a reduction of the forest area, but rather a quality decrease in its condition.
Revised:  "This does not invkgolve a reduction of the forest area, but rather a quality decrease in its condition.
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Original: upright=1.4|Degraded forest in Lahnberge, Germany: the soil is being washed out due to lack of vegetal cover, some trees are loshiiing ground and they appear to be sick (photo by Andreas Trepte).
Revised: upright=1.4|Degraded forest in Lahnberge, Germany: the soil is being washed out due to lack of vegetal cover, some trees are losing ground and they appear to be sick (photo by Andreas Trepte).
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Original:  "This does not invkgolve a reduction of the forest area, but rather a quality decrease in its condition.
Revised:  "This does not involve a reduction of the forest area, but rather a quality decrease in its condition.
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Original:  The UN-REDD Programme supports its partner countries (more than 60) through direct funding and technical support to national REDD+ programmes and technical capacity enhancing  
Revised:  The UN-REDD Programme supports its partner countries (more than 60) through direct funding and technical support to national REDD+ programmes and technical capacity enhancing . 
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Original:  References URL URL
Revised:  External links Official website Storiewerf
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Original: Personal life Louise Prinsloo and her husband, Daan.
Revised: Personal life 
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Original: Ataraxia (ἀταραξία, alpha privative negation of tarachê -- disturbance, trouble  ;Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy URL hence, "unperturbedness", generally translated as "imperturbability", "equanimity", or "tranquility") is a Greek term first used in Ancient Greek philosophy by Pyrrho and subsequently Epicurus and the Stoics for a lucid state of robust equanimity characterized by ongoing freedom from distress and worry.
Revised: Ataraxia (ἀταραξία, alpha privative and tarachē " disturbance, trouble ;Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy URL hence, "unperturbedness", generally translated as "imperturbability", "equanimity", or "tranquility") is a Greek term first used in Ancient Greek philosophy by Pyrrho and subsequently Epicurus and the Stoics for a lucid state of robust equanimity characterized by ongoing freedom from distress and worry.
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Original: Ataraxia (ἀταραξία, alpha privative negation of tarachê -- disturbance, trouble  ;Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy URL hence, "unperturbedness", generally translated as "imperturbability", "equanimity", or "tranquility") is a Greek term first used in Ancient Greek philosophy by Pyrrho and subsequently Epicurus and the Stoics for a lucid state of robust equanimity characterized by ongoing freedom from distress and worry.
Revised: Ataraxia (ἀταραξία, alpha privative negation of tarachê -- disturbance, trouble " ;Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy URL hence, "unperturbedness", generally translated as "imperturbability", "equanimity", or "tranquility") is a Greek term first used in Ancient Greek philosophy by Pyrrho and subsequently Epicurus and the Stoics for a lucid state of robust equanimity characterized by ongoing freedom from distress and worry.
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Original: Ataraxia (  ἀταραξία, alpha privative and tarachē "disturbance, trouble";Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy URL hence, "unperturbedness", generally translated as "imperturbability", "equanimity", or "tranquility") is a Greek term first used in Ancient Greek philosophy by Pyrrho and subsequently Epicurus and the Stoics for a lucid state of robust equanimity characterized by ongoing freedom from distress and worry.
Revised: Ataraxia ( Greek: ἀταραξία, alpha privative and tarachē "disturbance, trouble";Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy URL hence, "unperturbedness", generally translated as "imperturbability", "equanimity", or "tranquility") is a Greek term first used in Ancient Greek philosophy by Pyrrho and subsequently Epicurus and the Stoics for a lucid state of robust equanimity characterized by ongoing freedom from distress and worry.
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Original:  Since the Stoic sage does not care about matters outside of himself and is not susceptible to emotion because of his state of apatheia, the Stoic sage would be unable to be disturbed by anything at all, meaning that he was in a stage of mental tranquility and thus was in the state of ataraxia  
Revised:  Since the Stoic sage does not care about matters outside of himself and is not susceptible to emotion because of his state of apatheia, the Stoic sage would be unable to be disturbed by anything at all, meaning that he was in a stage of mental tranquility and thus was in the state of ataraxia . 
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Original:  So the flight or redemption of pain lies in the extinction or nakedness -nirvana- of all desire or disturbing affection, as especially the desire to live
Revised:  So the flight or redemption of pain lies in the extinction or nakedness of all desire or disturbing affection, as especially the desire to live
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Original:  Victor Manjila Dazzling Display Manjila played for Calicut University during his college days in st.thomas college, thrissur.
Revised:  Victor Manjila so called dive Manjila played for Calicut University during his college days in st.thomas college, thrissur.
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Original:  Victor Manjila so called dive Manjila played for Calicut University during his college days in st.thomas college, thrissur.
Revised:  Victor Manjila Dazzling Display Manjila played for Calicut University during his college days in st.thomas college, thrissur.
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Original:  He is also training students of Peevees Group of Schools KSA (not really) and led them to the first position from last .
Revised:  He is also training students of Peevees Group of Schools KSA .
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Original:  Victor Manjila Dazzling Display Manjila played for Calicut University during his college days in st.thomas college, thrissur.
Revised:  Manjila played for Calicut University during his college days in st.thomas college, thrissur.
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Original:  Victor Manjila's Match Saving Dive After the retirement from the professional football Manjila became a football coach and trained Calicut University for several years.
Revised:  After the retirement from the professional football Manjila became a football coach and trained Calicut University for several years.
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Original:  In 1985, Shaktu Film established 'Aradhana Sound Service', a digital audio post-production facility which works both for Bollywood as well as Hollywood films.
Revised:  In 1985, Shakti Films established 'Aradhana Sound Service', a digital audio post-production facility which works both for Bollywood as well as Hollywood films.
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Original:  Kashmir Ki Kali (1964) Sawan Ki Ghata (1966) An Evening in Paris (1967) Aradhana (1969) Kati Patang (1970) Pagla Kahin Ka (1970) Jaane-Anjaane (1971) Amar Prem (1971) Anuraag (1972) Charitraheen (1974) Ajanabee (1974) Amanush (1975) Mehbooba (1976) Anurodh (1977) Anand Ashram (1977) The Great Gambler (1979) Khwab (1980) Barsaat Ki Ek Raat (1981) Ayaash (1982) Awaaz (1984) Alag Alag (1985) Aar Paar (1985) Anyay Abichar (1985) Andha Bichar (1990) Dushman (1990) Geetanjali (1993) Devdas (2002)
Revised:  Kashmir Ki Kali (1964) Sawan Ki Ghata (1966) An Evening in Paris (1967) Aradhana (1969) Kati Patang (1970) Pagla Kahin Ka (1970) Jaane-Anjaane (1971) Amar Prem (1971) Anuraag (1972) Charitraheen (1974) Ajanabee (1974) Amanush (1975) Mehbooba (1976) Anurodh (1977) Anand Ashram (1977) The Great Gambler (1979) Khwaab (1980) Barsaat Ki Ek Raat (1981) Ayaash (1982) Awaaz (1984) Alag Alag (1985) Aar Paar (1985) Anyay Abichar (1985) Andha Bichar (1990) Dushman (1990) Geetanjali (1993) Devdas (2002)
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Original: 2009 deaths Category:Bengali film directors Category:Filmfare Awards winners Category:Hindi-language film directors Category:21st-century Indian film directors Category:Film producers from West Bengal Category:People from Purba Bardhaman district Category:University of Calcutta alumni Category:Indian male screenwriters Category:Bengali Hindus Category:Bengali people Category:20th-century Indian film directors Category:Film directors from West Bengal Category:20th-century Indian screenwrite
Revised: 2009 deaths Category:Bengali film directors Category:Filmfare Awards winners Category:Hindi-language film directors Category:21st-century Indian film directors Category:Film producers from West Bengal Category:People from Purba Bardhaman district Category:University of Calcutta alumni Category:Indian male screenwriters Category:Bengali Hindus Category:Bengali people Category:20th-century Indian film directors Category:Film directors from West Bengal Category:20th-century Indian screenwriters Category:20th-century Indian male write
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Original: Staff appointments and chief of naval staff Vice-Admiral Khan was promoted to four-star rank on 11 August 1991 by Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto.
Revised: Staff appointments and Chief of naval staff Vice-Admiral Khan was promoted to four-star rank on 11 August 1991 by Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto.
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Original:  His family emigrated to Pakistan following the partition of India in 1947, and settled in Karachi . Pakistan.
Revised:  His family emigrated to Pakistan following the partition of India in 1947, and settled in Karachi , Pakistan.
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Original: In 1954, he gained commissioned as Midshipman in the Operations Branch of the Pakistan Navy in 1954 and was sent to the United Kingdom to be trained at the HMS Dryad as a navigation specialist.
Revised: In 1954, he gained commissioned as Midshipman in the Operations Branch of the Pakistan Navy in 1954 and was sent to the United Kingdom to be trained at as a navigation specialist.
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Original:  Upon his return in 1958, he was promoted as Sub-Lieutenant in the Navy and provided his services of PNS Tariq as a gunnery.
Revised:  Upon his return in 1958, he was promoted as sub-lieutenant in the Navy and provided his services of PNS Tariq as a gunnery.
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Original:  Upon his return in 1958, he was promoted as Sub-Lieutenant in the Navy and provided his services of PNS Tariq as a gunnery.
Revised:  Upon his return in 1958, he was promoted as Sub-Lieutenant in the Navy and served aboard PNS Tariq in gunnery.
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Original:  In the 1960s, he commanded the PNS Tariq as her commanding officer and participated in the second with India in 1965 and then in the third war with India in 1971 as an artillery specialist and earned a nickname "Beast of the Sea" by his superiors.
Revised:  In the 1960s, he was the commanding officer of PNS Tariq and participated in the second with India in 1965 and then in the third war with India in 1971 as an artillery specialist and earned a nickname "Beast of the Sea" by his superiors.
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Original:  His career in the Navy progressed well and was the Flag Officer Sea Training of Pakistan Navy from 1980–84 as Rear-Admiral .
Revised:  His career in the Navy progressed well and was the Flag Officer Sea Training of Pakistan Navy from 1980–84 as rear-admiral .
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Original:  As VCNS, Vice-Admiral Khan was responsible for the Naval warfare exercise and command structure of the Navy.
Revised:  As VCNS, Vice-Admiral Khan was responsible for the naval warfare exercise and command structure of the Navy.
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Original:  In an interview with Times Now an Urdu-language political correspondent, he ultimately warned of Indian Navy's expansion into the Blue-water navy in order to establish the "Greater India."
Revised:  In an interview with Times Now an Urdu-language political correspondent, he ultimately warned of Indian Navy's expansion into the blue-water navy in order to establish the "Greater India."
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Original:  In 1994, Admiral Khan is said to have recommended against acquiring the designs and development of the Agosta 90Bravo class submarines in coordination with France over the British Upholder-class submarine.
Revised:  In 1994, Admiral Khan is said to have recommended against acquiring the designs and development of the Agosta 90Bravo-class submarines in coordination with France over the British Upholder-class submarine.
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Original:  His recommendations were bypassed by the government and the Agosta 90B class submarines were acquired and built in successive long years.
Revised:  His recommendations were bypassed by the government and the Agosta 90B-class submarines were acquired and built in successive long years.
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Original:  On 9 November 1994, Admiral Saeed handed over the command to Admiral Mansurul Haq who was tenuring as the chairman of Pakistan National Shipping Corporation who was appointed by the Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto.
Revised:  On 9 November 1994, Admiral Saeed handed over the command to Admiral Mansurul Haq who was tenuring as the chairman of PNSC who was appointed by the Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto.
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Original: Biography Naval career Saeed Mohammad Khan was born on 1 October 1935 in Bhopal, British India into a Bhopali-Pathan family.
Revised: Biography Naval career Saeed Mohammad Khan was born on 1 October 1935 in Bhopal, British India into a Pathan family.
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Original:  It is estimated that only 25 to 30 counties in the world have the infastructure for the required ultracold cold chain.
Revised:  It is estimated that only 25 to 30 countries in the world have the infastructure for the required ultracold cold chain.
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Original: For vaccinations in particular, there are different types of cold chains.
Revised: For vaccines, in particular, there are different types of cold chains.
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Original: For vaccines, in particular, there are different types of cold chains.
Revised: For vaccines, there are different types of cold chains.
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Original:  There is an ultralow, or deep freeze, cold chain for vaccines that require -70 degrees C . The Ebola and Pfizer–BioNTech COVID-19 vaccines require this level, as do some animal vaccinations, such as those for chickens.
Revised:  There is an ultralow, or deep freeze, cold chain for vaccines that require -70 degrees C , such as the Ebola and Pfizer–BioNTech COVID-19 vaccines require this level, as do some animal vaccinations, such as those for chickens.
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Original:  There is an ultralow, or deep freeze, cold chain for vaccines that require -70 degrees C . The Ebola and Pfizer–BioNTech COVID-19 vaccines require this level, as do some animal vaccinations, such as those for chickens.
Revised:  There is an ultralow, or deep freeze, cold chain for vaccines that require -70 degrees C . The Ebola and Pfizer–BioNTech COVID-19 vaccines , and some animal vaccinations, such as those for chickens.
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Original:  There is an ultralow, or deep freeze, cold chain for vaccines that require -70 degrees C, such as the Ebola and Pfizer–BioNTech COVID-19 vaccines, and some animal vaccinations , such as those for chickens.
Revised:  There is an ultralow, or deep freeze, cold chain for vaccines that require -70 degrees C, such as the Ebola and Pfizer–BioNTech COVID-19 vaccines, and some animal vaccines , such as those for chickens.
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Original: In 2020  during the COVID-19 pandemic, vaccines being developed may need ultracold storage and transportation temperatures as cold as , requiring what has been referred to as a "colder chain" infrastructure.
Revised: In 2020 , during the COVID-19 pandemic, vaccines being developed may need ultracold storage and transportation temperatures as cold as , requiring what has been referred to as a "colder chain" infrastructure.
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