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Original:  After a shaky start, Samuel Eto'o shot the ball past Manchester United goalkeeper Edwin van der Sar in the tenth minute, the only goal Barcelona would need.
Revised:  After a shaky start, Samuel Eto'o shot the ball past Manchester United goalkeeper in the tenth minute, the only goal Barcelona would need.
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Original:  Manchester had several great chances in the opening ten minutes, with Christiano Ronaldo forcing a save from Barca keeper Víctor Valdés in the second minute.
Revised:  Manchester had several great chances in the opening ten minutes, with forcing a save from Barca keeper Víctor Valdés in the second minute.
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Original:  Manchester had several great chances in the opening ten minutes, with Christiano Ronaldo forcing a save from Barca keeper Víctor Valdés in the second minute.
Revised:  Manchester had several great chances in the opening ten minutes, with Christiano Ronaldo forcing a save from Barca keeper in the second minute.
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Original:  In the 53rd minute, Xavi Hernández 's free kick hit the crossbar, which proved to be Barca's best chance early in the half.
Revised:  In the 53rd minute, 's free kick hit the crossbar, which proved to be Barca's best chance early in the half.
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Original:  Four minutes later, Barca captain Carles Puyol has a great chance on goal, but van der Saar in the United goal is equal to the task.
Revised:  Four minutes later, Barca captain has a great chance on goal, but van der Saar in the United goal is equal to the task.
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Original:  This was followed on Thursday by another tweet stating that the protest would take place on April 2, 2014 - it appears as though WBC has since removed this tweet.
Revised:  This was followed on Thursday by another tweet stating that the protest would take place on April 2, 2014.
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Original: (WBC) failed to follow through on last week 's threats to picket a high school's performance of . was able to perform the play based on the 1998 beating and death of gay student, to a sold-out audience undisrupted on Tuesday night.
Revised: (WBC) failed to follow through last week on its threats to picket a high school's performance of . was able to perform the play based on the 1998 beating and death of gay student, to a sold-out audience undisrupted on Tuesday night.
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Original:  This was followed on Thursday by another tweet stating that the protest would take place on April 2, 2014.
Revised:  This was followed on Thursday by another tweet stating that the protest would take place on April 2.
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Original: was able to perform the play based on the 1998 beating and death of gay student , to a sold-out audience undisrupted on last Tuesday night, April 1.
Revised: was able to perform the play based on the 1998 beating and death of gay student to a sold-out audience undisrupted on last Tuesday night, April 1.
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Original: was able to perform the play based on the 1998 beating and death of gay student to a sold-out audience undisrupted on last Tuesday night, April 1.
Revised: was able to perform the play based on the 1998 beating and death of student to a sold-out audience undisrupted on last Tuesday night, April 1.
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Original:  This was followed on Thursday  by another tweet stating that the protest would take place on April 2.
Revised:  This was followed on Thursday by another tweet stating the protest would take place on April 2.
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Original: It will be a two day journey to the ISS with the crew expecting to arrive on Friday.
Revised: It was a two day journey to the ISS with the crew expecting to arrive on Friday.
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Original: It will be a two day journey to the ISS with the crew expecting to arrive on Friday.
Revised: It will be a two day journey to the ISS with the crew arriving on Friday.
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Original:  Then there will be six crew members aboard the ISS who will represent all five global space agencies;
Revised:  Then there will be six crew members aboard the ISS who represent all five global space agencies;
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Original: It was a two day journey to the ISS with the crew arriving on Friday.
Revised: It will be a two day journey to the ISS with the crew arriving on Friday.
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Original: It was a two day journey to the ISS with the crew arriving on Friday.
Revised: It was a two day journey to the ISS with the crew expecting to arrive on Friday.
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Original:  There are now six crew members aboard the ISS who  represent all five global space agencies;
Revised:  There are now six crew members aboard the ISS who will represent all five global space agencies;
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Original:  "The principal amount of notes tendered was substantially less than the amount required by GM to satisfy the debt reduction requirement," GM said in a statement.
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Original: The Israeli parliament  has initially voted in favor of two bills, the 'Loyalty Oath Law', and the 'Nakba Law'  both of which have sparked major controversy , and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in occupied Palestine .
Revised: The Israeli parliament has initially voted in favor of two bills, the 'Loyalty Oath Law', and the 'Nakba Law' - both of which have sparked major controversy , and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in occupied Palestine .
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Original: The Israeli parliament  has initially voted in favor of two bills, the 'Loyalty Oath Law', and the 'Nakba Law'  both of which have sparked major controversy , and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in occupied Palestine .
Revised: The Israeli parliament has initially voted in favor of two bills, the 'Loyalty Oath Law', and the 'Nakba Law' both of which have sparked major controversy and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in occupied Palestine .
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Original: The Israeli parliament  has initially voted in favor of two bills, the 'Loyalty Oath Law', and the 'Nakba Law'  both of which have sparked major controversy , and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in occupied Palestine .
Revised: The Israeli parliament has initially voted in favor of two bills, the 'Loyalty Oath Law', and the 'Nakba Law' both of which have sparked major controversy , and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in the occupied territories .
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Original:  The 'Nakba' is commemorated in the Arab world as marking the day when Palestinians were dispossesed of their lands by the creation of the Israeli state.
Revised:  The 'Nakba' is commemorated in the Arab world as marking the day when Palestinians were dispossessed of their lands by the creation of the Israeli state.
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Original:  The bills have to pass three votes and a committee review before taking effect as a legislation
Revised:  The bills have to pass three votes and a committee review before taking effect as legislation
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Original:  ]]The Israeli parliament, the Knesset has initially voted in favor of two bills, the ' Loyalty Oath Law ' , and the 'Nakba Law' - both of which have sparked major controversy and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in the occupied territories.
Revised:  ]]The Israeli parliament, the Knesset has initially voted in favor of two bills, the " Loyalty Oath Law ' , and the 'Nakba Law' - both of which have sparked major controversy and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in the occupied territories.
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Original:  ]]The Israeli parliament, the Knesset has initially voted in favor of two bills, the ' Loyalty Oath Law ' , and the 'Nakba Law' - both of which have sparked major controversy and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in the occupied territories.
Revised:  ]]The Israeli parliament, the Knesset has initially voted in favor of two bills, the ' Loyalty Oath Law " , and the 'Nakba Law' - both of which have sparked major controversy and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in the occupied territories.
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Original:  ]]The Israeli parliament, the Knesset has initially voted in favor of two bills, the ' Loyalty Oath Law ' , and the 'Nakba Law' - both of which have sparked major controversy and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in the occupied territories.
Revised:  ]]The Israeli parliament, the Knesset has initially voted in favor of two bills, the ' Loyalty Oath Law ' , and the "Nakba Law", both of which have sparked major controversy and are aimed at Palestinians living in Israel who are critical of Israeli policies in the occupied territories.
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Original:  The second law, the 'Nakba Law', makes marking the 'Nakba ' illegal.
Revised:  The second law, the 'Nakba Law', makes marking the Nakba illegal.
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Original:  The 'Nakba ' is commemorated in the Arab world as marking the day when Palestinians were dispossessed of their lands by the creation of the Israeli state.
Revised:  The Nakba is commemorated in the Arab world as marking the day when Palestinians were dispossessed of their lands by the creation of the Israeli state.
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Original:  Another law proposed this week by Israel's Beitenu party, requires a citation of a loyalty oath to Israel in order to gain an identification card.
Revised:  Another law proposed this week by Israel's Beitenu party, requires a citation of a loyalty oath to Israel in order to gain a compulsory identification card.
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Original:  During the debate on the initial 'loyalty' law in the Knesset its proponents faced serious attacks from the opposition.
Revised:  During the debate on the initial Loyalty Oath Law in the Knesset its proponents faced serious attacks from the opposition.
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Original:  From the Kadima party's representatives Ronnie Bar-On  asserted existing law sufficed, and described the new legislation as , "You want to punish people for talking?
Revised:  Ronnie Bar-On asserted existing law sufficed, and described the new legislation as , "You want to punish people for talking?
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Original:  From the Kadima party's representatives Ronnie Bar-On  asserted existing law sufficed, and described the new legislation as , "You want to punish people for talking?
Revised:  From the Kadima party's representatives Ronnie Bar-On of Kadima asserted existing law sufficed, and described the new legislation as , "You want to punish people for talking?
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Original:  From the Kadima party's representatives Ronnie Bar-On  asserted existing law sufficed, and described the new legislation as , "You want to punish people for talking?
Revised:  From the Kadima party's representatives Ronnie Bar-On asserted existing law sufficed, and disdained the new legislation as , "You want to punish people for talking?
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Original:  From the Kadima party's representatives Ronnie Bar-On  asserted existing law sufficed, and described the new legislation as , "You want to punish people for talking?
Revised:  From the Kadima party's representatives Ronnie Bar-On asserted existing law sufficed, and described the new legislation , saying , "You want to punish people for talking?
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Original:  The Nakba is commemorated in the Arab world as marking the day when Palestinians were dispossessed of their lands by the creation of the Israeli state.
Revised:  The Nakba is commemorated in the Arab world as marking the day when Palestinians were dispossessed of their lands for the creation of the Israeli state.
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Original:  Photographs from the protest are available for viewing, in the following 2 facebook albums:
Revised:  FurtherPhotographs from the protest are available for viewing, in the following 2 facebook albums:
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Original: 3 Arrested at Peaceful Demonstration Event Took Place On: Saturday, May 23, 2009 Protesters against police violence , on Saturday, marched from Trafalgar Square to New Scotland Yard in central London.
Revised:  Event Took Place On: Saturday, May 23, 2009 Protesters against police violence , on Saturday, marched from Trafalgar Square to New Scotland Yard in central London.
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Original: 3 Arrested at Peaceful Demonstration Event Took Place On: Saturday, May 23, 2009 Protesters against police violence , on Saturday, marched from Trafalgar Square to New Scotland Yard in central London.
Revised: 3 Arrested at Peaceful Demonstration Protesters against police violence , on Saturday, marched from Trafalgar Square to New Scotland Yard in central London.
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Original: 3 Arrested at Peaceful Demonstration Event Took Place On: Saturday, May 23, 2009 Protesters against police violence , on Saturday, marched from Trafalgar Square to New Scotland Yard in central London.
Revised: 3 Arrested at Peaceful Demonstration Event Took Place On: Saturday, May 23, 2009 Protesters against police violence marched Saturday, May 23, from Trafalgar Square to New Scotland Yard in central London.
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Original:  Protesters marched against police violence in the UK, including as perpetrated by 'riot ' police against activist activities and by other police towards members of black and ethnic minority communities.
Revised:  Protesters marched against police violence in the UK, including as perpetrated by riot police against activist activities and by other police towards members of black and ethnic minority communities.
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Original:  The protest also called for an end to containment of protesters by police on demonstrations, a controversial tactic known as 'Kettling' and for freedom to protest without intervention by police.
Revised:  The protest also called for an end to containment of protesters by police on demonstrations, a controversial tactic known as "Kettling" and for freedom to protest without intervention by police.
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Original:  the headquarters of the Metropolitan Police Service, passing Downing Street and Parliament ( Palace of Westminster ) , encountering minor police resistance and cheering Tamil Tigers protesters in Parliament Square as they marched past.
Revised:  the headquarters of the Metropolitan Police Service, passing Downing Street and Parliament in the Palace of Westminster ) , encountering minor police resistance and cheering Tamil Tigers protesters in Parliament Square as they marched past.
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Original:  the headquarters of the Metropolitan Police Service, passing Downing Street and Parliament ( Palace of Westminster ) , encountering minor police resistance and cheering Tamil Tigers protesters in Parliament Square as they marched past.
Revised:  the headquarters of the Metropolitan Police Service, passing Downing Street and Parliament ( Palace of Westminster , encountering minor police resistance and cheering Tamil Tigers protesters in Parliament Square as they marched past.
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Original:  Slogans chanted throughout the march included ' No Justice;
Revised:  Slogans chanted throughout the march included " No Justice;
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Original:  No Peace ' and calls for the dissolving of the police Territorial Support Group (TSG), who have allegedly perpetrated acts of serious violence against protesters and provided a large amount of the police involved in allegations of brutality after the G20 summit protests  . Among these calls were questions of 'How many skulls have you cracked today' and call and response of 'Hey Hey, Hey, Ho, Ho, The TSG Has Got to Go'.
Revised:  No Peace " and calls for the dissolving of the police Territorial Support Group (TSG), who have allegedly perpetrated acts of serious violence against protesters and provided a large amount of the police involved in allegations of brutality after the G20 summit protests . Among these calls were questions of 'How many skulls have you cracked today' and call and response of 'Hey Hey, Hey, Ho, Ho, The TSG Has Got to Go'.
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Original:  No Peace ' and calls for the dissolving of the police Territorial Support Group (TSG), who have allegedly perpetrated acts of serious violence against protesters and provided a large amount of the police involved in allegations of brutality after the G20 summit protests  . Among these calls were questions of 'How many skulls have you cracked today' and call and response of 'Hey Hey, Hey, Ho, Ho, The TSG Has Got to Go'.
Revised:  No Peace ' and calls for the dissolving of the police Territorial Support Group (TSG), who have allegedly perpetrated acts of serious violence against protesters ; a large proportion of the allegations of brutality after the G20 summit protests . Among these calls were questions of 'How many skulls have you cracked today' and call and response of 'Hey Hey, Hey, Ho, Ho, The TSG Has Got to Go'.
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Original:  No Peace ' and calls for the dissolving of the police Territorial Support Group (TSG), who have allegedly perpetrated acts of serious violence against protesters and provided a large amount of the police involved in allegations of brutality after the G20 summit protests  . Among these calls were questions of 'How many skulls have you cracked today' and call and response of 'Hey Hey, Hey, Ho, Ho, The TSG Has Got to Go'.
Revised:  No Peace ' and calls for the dissolving of the police Territorial Support Group (TSG), who have allegedly perpetrated acts of serious violence against protesters and provided a large amount of the police involved in allegations of brutality during the G20 summit protests . Among these calls were questions of 'How many skulls have you cracked today' and call and response of 'Hey Hey, Hey, Ho, Ho, The TSG Has Got to Go'.
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Original:  No Peace ' and calls for the dissolving of the police Territorial Support Group (TSG), who have allegedly perpetrated acts of serious violence against protesters and provided a large amount of the police involved in allegations of brutality after the G20 summit protests  . Among these calls were questions of 'How many skulls have you cracked today' and call and response of 'Hey Hey, Hey, Ho, Ho, The TSG Has Got to Go'.
Revised:  No Peace ' and calls for the dissolving of the police Territorial Support Group (TSG), who have allegedly perpetrated acts of serious violence against protesters and provided a large amount of the police involved in allegations of brutality after the G20 summit protests . Among these calls were questions of 'How many skulls have you cracked today' and call-and-response of 'Hey Hey, Hey, Ho, Ho, The TSG Has Got to Go'.
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Original:  The attempted 'Kettling' of the building was followed by speeches from people affected by police violence, including , member of the United Friends and Families Campaign, Doreen Bishop ;
Revised:  The attempted "kettling" of the building was followed by speeches from people affected by police violence, including , member of the United Friends and Families Campaign, Doreen Bishop ;
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Original:  The attempted 'Kettling' of the building was followed by speeches from people affected by police violence, including , member of the United Friends and Families Campaign, Doreen Bishop ;
Revised:  The attempted 'Kettling' of the building was followed by speeches from people affected by police violence, including member of the United Friends and Families Campaign, Doreen Bishop ;
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Original:  The attempted 'Kettling' of the building was followed by speeches from people affected by police violence, including , member of the United Friends and Families Campaign, Doreen Bishop ;
Revised:  The attempted 'Kettling' of the building was followed by speeches from people affected by police violence, including , member of the United Friends and Families Campaign, Doreen Bishop ,
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Original:  mother of Ricky Bishop : who died in police custody in 2001, with serious wounds sustained since his arrest by police in Brixton, and the controversial inquest verdict of 'Death by Misadventure'.
Revised:  mother of Ricky Bishop who died in police custody in 2001, with serious wounds sustained since his arrest by police in Brixton, and the controversial inquest verdict of 'Death by Misadventure'.
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Original:  mother of Ricky Bishop : who died in police custody in 2001, with serious wounds sustained since his arrest by police in Brixton, and the controversial inquest verdict of 'Death by Misadventure'.
Revised:  mother of Ricky Bishop : who died in police custody in 2001.
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Original:  Also speaking was Sam Rigg-David, representing the Sean Rigg Justice & Change Campaign (), Chris Nineham from the Stop The War Coalition , Martin Smith from the Socialist Workers Party and political rap performer/poet Lowkey and many other representatives from campaign groups and those representing affected families and groups. %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:UPLOAD_UCAPV_RALLY_NSY.jpg|frame|Rally at Scotland Yard As the speeches ended, activists set up a sound system and held an open mic in the road.
Revised:  Also speaking was Sam Rigg-David, representing the Sean Rigg Justice & Change Campaign ; Chris Nineham from the Stop The War Coalition , Martin Smith from the Socialist Workers Party and political rap performer/poet Lowkey and many other representatives from campaign groups and those representing affected families and groups. %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:UPLOAD_UCAPV_RALLY_NSY.jpg|frame|Rally at Scotland Yard As the speeches ended, activists set up a sound system and held an open mic in the road.
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Original:  Also speaking was Sam Rigg-David, representing the Sean Rigg Justice & Change Campaign (), Chris Nineham from the Stop The War Coalition , Martin Smith from the Socialist Workers Party and political rap performer/poet Lowkey and many other representatives from campaign groups and those representing affected families and groups. %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:UPLOAD_UCAPV_RALLY_NSY.jpg|frame|Rally at Scotland Yard As the speeches ended, activists set up a sound system and held an open mic in the road.
Revised:  Also speaking was Sam Rigg-David, representing the Sean Rigg Justice & Change Campaign (), Chris Nineham from the Stop The War Coalition ; Martin Smith from the Socialist Workers Party and political rap performer/poet Lowkey and many other representatives from campaign groups and those representing affected families and groups. %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:UPLOAD_UCAPV_RALLY_NSY.jpg|frame|Rally at Scotland Yard As the speeches ended, activists set up a sound system and held an open mic in the road.
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Original:  Also speaking was Sam Rigg-David, representing the Sean Rigg Justice & Change Campaign (), Chris Nineham from the Stop The War Coalition , Martin Smith from the Socialist Workers Party and political rap performer/poet Lowkey and many other representatives from campaign groups and those representing affected families and groups. %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image:UPLOAD_UCAPV_RALLY_NSY.jpg|frame|Rally at Scotland Yard As the speeches ended, activists set up a sound system and held an open mic in the road.
Revised:  Also speaking was Sam Rigg-David, representing the Sean Rigg Justice & Change Campaign (), Chris Nineham from the Stop The War Coalition , Martin Smith from the Socialist Workers Party and political rap performer/poet Lowkey and many other representatives from campaign groups and those representing affected families and groups. %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% As the speeches ended, activists set up a sound system and held an open mic in the road.
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