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Original:  With West Ham 3-2 up, play continued at a fast pace with plenty of opportunities both ways , but the Hammers looked set to hold out till the final whistle.
Revised:  With West Ham 3-2 up, play continued at a fast pace with plenty of opportunities for both teams , but the Hammers looked set to hold out till the final whistle.
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Original:  As the clock hit 90 minutes though, Gerrard,  suffering from cramp, saved Liverpool from defeat with a last minute goal.
Revised:  As the clock hit 90 minutes though, Gerrard, despite suffering from cramp, saved Liverpool from defeat with a last minute goal.
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Original:  Going into extra time, both teams were suffering from the fast-paced action of the first half , with several injured and cramp-suffering players on both teams.
Revised:  Going into extra time, both teams were suffering from the fast tempo of the first half , with several injured and cramp-suffering players on both teams.
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Original:  Going into extra time, both teams were suffering from the fast-paced action of the first half , with several injured and cramp-suffering players on both teams.
Revised:  Going into extra time, both teams were suffering from the fast-paced action of the first 90 minutes , with several injured and cramp-suffering players on both teams.
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Original:  With both sides having used up their three substitutions though , they had no choice but to battle on . Compared to the rest of the match, play slowed down considerably , with players visibly suffering from exhaustion and injury .
Revised:  With both sides having used up their three substitutions however , they had no choice but to battle on . Compared to the rest of the match, play slowed down considerably , with players visibly suffering from exhaustion and injury .
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Original:  With both sides having used up their three substitutions though , they had no choice but to battle on . Compared to the rest of the match, play slowed down considerably , with players visibly suffering from exhaustion and injury .
Revised:  With both sides having used up their three substitutions though , they had no choice but to battle on , and compared to the rest of the match, play slowed down considerably , with players visibly suffering from exhaustion and injury .
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Original:  With both sides having used up their three substitutions though , they had no choice but to battle on . Compared to the rest of the match, play slowed down considerably , with players visibly suffering from exhaustion and injury .
Revised:  With both sides having used up their three substitutions though , they had no choice but to battle on . Compared to the rest of the match, play slowed down considerably .
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Original:  40 year old  Teddy Sheringham scored one for West Ham, but with two of West Ham's penalties getting saved by the keeper, Liverpool won with 3-1, missing just one penalty themselves.
Revised:  40 year old w: Teddy Sheringham scored one for West Ham, but with two of West Ham's penalties getting saved by the keeper, Liverpool won with 3-1, missing just one penalty themselves.
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Original:  40 year old  Teddy Sheringham scored one for West Ham, but with two of West Ham's penalties getting saved by the keeper, Liverpool won with 3-1, missing just one penalty themselves.
Revised:  40 year old Teddy Sheringham scored one for West Ham, but with two of West Ham's penalties getting saved by the keeper, Liverpool won 3-1, missing just one penalty themselves.
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Original:  The elections in Iraq were cited as an example of thi
Revised:  The elections in Iraq were cited as an example of this
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Original:  It proposed economic change, Social Security reform, the defense of the definition of marriage, and the spread of liberty in Iraq and elsewhere.
Revised:  In the address, he proposed economic change, Social Security reform, the defense of the definition of marriage, and the spread of liberty in Iraq and elsewhere.
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Original:  The elections in Iraq were cited as an example of this 
Revised:  The elections in Iraq were cited as an example of this policy
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Original: In the margins of Wilson's article Cheney wrote a series of questions about the legitimacy of Wilson's CIA-sponsored trip to Niger  "Have they done this sort of thing before?
Revised: In the margins of Wilson's article Cheney wrote a series of questions about the legitimacy of Wilson's CIA-sponsored trip to Niger : "Have they done this sort of thing before?
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Original:  Or did his wife send him on a junket?" Spokesperson for the Vice President Lea Ann McBride declined to comment on the publishing of the notes, but stressed that the Office of the Vice President continues to cooperate with the investigation  
Revised:  Or did his wife send him on a junket?" Spokesperson for the Vice President Lea Ann McBride declined to comment on the publishing of the notes, but stressed that the Office of the Vice President continues to cooperate with the investigation . 
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Original:  Or did his wife send him on a junket?" Spokesperson for the Vice President Lea Ann McBride declined to comment on the publishing of the notes, but stressed that the Office of the Vice President continues to cooperate with the investigation  
Revised:  Or did his wife send him on a junket?" Spokesperson for the Vice President Lea Ann McBride declined to comment on the publishing of the notes, but stressed that the Office of the Vice President continues to cooperate with the investigation Related New
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Original:  Beslan siege organiser, Chechen rebel Shamil Basayev, spoke for the first time since declaring he was responsible for the hostage situation.
Revised: The Beslan siege organiser, Chechen rebel Shamil Basayev, spoke for the first time since declaring he was responsible for the hostage situation.
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Original:  Beslan siege organiser, Chechen rebel Shamil Basayev, spoke for the first time since declaring he was responsible for the hostage situation.
Revised:  Beslan siege organiser, Chechen rebel Shamil Basayev, has spoken for the first time since declaring he was responsible for the hostage situation.
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Original:  Basayev was also responsible for the Moscow Theatre hostage situation , in which 130 people died as a result of military efforts to free the hostages and overwhelm the terrorists.
Revised:  Basayev was also responsible for the Moscow Theatre siege , in which 130 people died as a result of military efforts to free the hostages and overwhelm the terrorists.
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Original:  Basayev was also responsible for the Moscow Theatre hostage situation , in which 130 people died as a result of military efforts to free the hostages and overwhelm the terrorists.
Revised:  Basayev was also responsible for the Moscow Theatre hostage situation , in which 130 people died after a military assualtto free the hostages and overwhelm the terrorists.
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Original:  A package containing 3 DVDs with an hour's statement by Basayev , responding to questions given by Channel Four Newsto a European intermediary four months ago .
Revised:  A package containing 3 DVDs with an hour's statement by Basayev was sent to Channel 4 News, four months after they asked an intermediary questions about them man behind the attacks .
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Original:  Statement Summary In the statement, the rebel leader aimed to justify the siege, claiming the Russian government's aggressive response was unexpected and led to the large number of deaths.
Revised:  In the statement, the rebel leader aimed to justify the siege, claiming the Russian government's aggressive response was unexpected and led to the large number of deaths.
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Original:  He restated that he is fighting for an end of Russian military offensives in Chechnya  
Revised:  He restated that he is fighting for an end of Russian military offensives in Chechnya . 
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Original:  He restated that he is fighting for an end of Russian military offensives in Chechnya  
Revised:  He restated that he is fighting for an end of Russian military offensives in Chechnya Referenc
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Original:  Basayev was also responsible for the Moscow Theatre siege, in which 130 people died after a military assualtto free the hostages and overwhelm the terrorists.
Revised:  Basayev was also responsible for the Moscow Theatre siege, in which 130 people died after a military assualt to free the hostages and overwhelm the terrorists.
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Original: The Beslan siege organiser, Chechen rebel Shamil Basayev , has spoken for the first time since declaring he was responsible for the hostage situation.
Revised: The Beslan siege organiser, Chechen rebel , has spoken for the first time since declaring he was responsible for the hostage situation.
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Original:  The Beslan school siege last September resulted in 330 deaths, half of which were children.
Revised:  The last September resulted in 330 deaths, half of which were children.
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Original:  Basayev was also responsible for the Moscow Theatre siege , in which 130 people died after a military assault to free the hostages and overwhelm the terrorists.
Revised:  Basayev was also responsible for the , in which 130 people died after a military assault to free the hostages and overwhelm the terrorists.
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Original:  A package containing three video CDs with an hour's statement by Basayev was sent to Channel 4 News , four months after they asked an intermediary questions about them man behind the attacks.
Revised:  A package containing three video CDs with an hour's statement by Basayev was sent to , four months after they asked an intermediary questions about them man behind the attacks.
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Original:  The 92-year-old man was found dead in his residence in the town of Sunday 
Revised:  The 92-year-old man was found deceased in his residence in the town of Sunday 
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Original:  The 92-year-old man was found deceased in his residence in the town of Sunday , with the force considering his deathto be a murder   ]
Revised:  The 92-year-old man was found deceased in his residence in the town of Sunday . ]
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Original:  The 92-year-old man was found deceased in his residence in the town of Sunday , with the force considering his deathto be a murder   ]
Revised:  The 92-year-old man was found deceased in his residence in the town of Sunday , with the force considering his deathto be a murder H]
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Original:  At 6PM concerned neighbours who were unable to rouse Bill gained access to his property and found him.  
Revised:  At 6PM concerned neighbours who were unable to rouse Bill gained access to his property and found him. " 
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Original: At a West Midlands Police press conference yesterday, Detective Superintendent Richard Baker appealed for any witnesses who may have been in the vicinity of the murder scene to come forward, while stating of Davis' last movements: "[H]e was seen at 9AM on Sunday 1 April in his front garden, where he stopped and chatted to passersby.
Revised: At a police press conference yesterday, Detective Superintendent Richard Baker appealed for any witnesses who may have been in the vicinity of the murder scene to come forward, while stating of Davis' last movements: "[H]e was seen at 9AM on Sunday 1 April in his front garden, where he stopped and chatted to passersby.
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Original:  The woman continues to cooperate with the force  ]
Revised:  The woman continues to cooperate with the force t]
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Original:  Chief Inspector Mike O'Hara, of a local policing operative in the town of - also in the West Midlands - stated he understands " t he local neighbourhood policing team who have an excellent working relationship with the local community will be on patrol to offer reassurance and will be available to link in with anyone that needs advice or would like to discuss any concerns they may have.
Revised:  Chief Inspector Mike O'Hara, of a local policing operative in the town of - also in the West Midlands - stated his " t he local neighbourhood policing team who have an excellent working relationship with the local community will be on patrol to offer reassurance and will be available to link in with anyone that needs advice or would like to discuss any concerns they may have.
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Original:  Chief Inspector Mike O'Hara, of a local policing operative in the town of - also in the West Midlands - stated he understands " t he local neighbourhood policing team who have an excellent working relationship with the local community will be on patrol to offer reassurance and will be available to link in with anyone that needs advice or would like to discuss any concerns they may have.
Revised:  Chief Inspector Mike O'Hara, of a local policing operative in the town of - also in the West Midlands - stated he understands " he local neighbourhood policing team who have an excellent working relationship with the local community will be on patrol to offer reassurance and will be available to link in with anyone that needs advice or would like to discuss any concerns they may have.
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Original:  Chief Inspector Mike O'Hara, of a local policing operative in the town of - also in the West Midlands - stated he understands " t he local neighbourhood policing team who have an excellent working relationship with the local community will be on patrol to offer reassurance and will be available to link in with anyone that needs advice or would like to discuss any concerns they may have.
Revised:  Chief Inspector Mike O'Hara, of a local policing operative in the town of - also in the West Midlands - stated he understands " t local neighbourhood policing team who have an excellent working relationship with the local community will be on patrol to offer reassurance and will be available to link in with anyone that needs advice or would like to discuss any concerns they may have.
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Original:  The Sharks stormed to victory over Perth-based Western Force, winning 41 points to 25, meaning that the Bulls would have to to score at least four tries to be ensured of a bonus point, to move ahead of the Sharks, who were now sitting in front of them on points difference.
Revised:  The Sharks stormed to victory over Perth-based Western Force, winning 41 points to 25, meaning that the Bulls would have to score at least four tries to be ensured of a bonus point, to move ahead of the Sharks, who were now sitting in front of them on points difference.
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Original: February 3 2005 Image:Zurab Zhvania.jpg|200px|Zurab Zhvania dies at age 41 of apparent CO poisoning]] Zurab Zhvania, Prime minister of Georgia, was found dead of gas poisoning at a friend's home.
Revised:  Image:Zurab Zhvania.jpg|200px|Zurab Zhvania dies at age 41 of apparent CO poisoning]] Zurab Zhvania, Prime minister of Georgia, was found dead of gas poisoning at a friend's home.
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Original: Once a protegé of Eduard Shevardnadze  and widely viewed as his chosen successor, Zhvania chose to join the opposition and supporting Saakashvili.
Revised: Once a protegé of Eduard Shevardnadze , and widely viewed as his chosen successor, Zhvania chose to join the opposition and supporting Saakashvili.
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Original: Once a protegé of Eduard Shevardnadze  and widely viewed as his chosen successor, Zhvania chose to join the opposition and supporting Saakashvili.
Revised: Once a protegé of Eduard Shevardnadze and widely viewed as his chosen successor, Zhvania chose to join the opposition in supporting Saakashvili.
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Original: Image:Zurab Zhvania.jpg|200px|Zurab Zhvania dies at age 41 of apparent CO poisoning Zurab Zhvania, Prime Minister of Georgia, was found dead of gas poisoning at a friend's home.
Revised:  Zurab Zhvania, Prime Minister of Georgia, was found dead of gas poisoning at a friend's home.
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Original:  Most of the free-to-air channels, however, were working, along with the sport channels, some channels did affect from picture pixelation
Revised:  Most of the free-to-air channels, however, were working, along with the sport channels, some channels did suffer from picture pixelation
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Original: 250px|Emblem of the ICRC In a statement released on Thursday  the International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) said  " Mr. Kellenberger deplored the fact that the U.S. authorities had not moved closer to granting the ICRC access to persons held in undisclosed locations."
Revised: 250px|Emblem of the ICRC In a statement released on Thursday , the International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) said " Mr. Kellenberger deplored the fact that the U.S. authorities had not moved closer to granting the ICRC access to persons held in undisclosed locations."
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Original: 250px|Emblem of the ICRC In a statement released on Thursday  the International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) said  " Mr. Kellenberger deplored the fact that the U.S. authorities had not moved closer to granting the ICRC access to persons held in undisclosed locations."
Revised: 250px|Emblem of the ICRC In a statement released on Thursday the International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) said " deplored the fact that the U.S. authorities had not moved closer to granting the ICRC access to persons held in undisclosed locations."
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Original:  The IRCR has started making request to get access to all U.S. detainees, including the ones held in alleged secret prisons, over two years ago.
Revised:  The ICRC started making requests to get access to all U.S. detainees, including the ones held in alleged secret prisons, over two years ago.
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Original:  After a meeting of IRCR President Jacob Kellenberger with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley  he again was refused permission access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centes chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
Revised:  After Kellenberger met with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley he again was refused permission access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centes chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
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Original:  After a meeting of IRCR President Jacob Kellenberger with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley  he again was refused permission access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centes chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
Revised:  After a meeting of IRCR President Jacob Kellenberger with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley , he again was refused permission access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centes chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
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Original:  After a meeting of IRCR President Jacob Kellenberger with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley  he again was refused permission access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centes chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
Revised:  After a meeting of IRCR President Jacob Kellenberger with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley he again was refused permission access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centers, chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
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Original:  In response  U.S. State Department spokesman Sean McCormack said that the ICRC has access to the vast majority of U.S. detainees, but said that "There is a certain subcategory of individuals who have forfeited their protections under the Geneva Conventions and there is not an obligation to allow access to those individuals.
Revised:  In response , U.S. State Department spokesman Sean McCormack said that the ICRC has access to the vast majority of U.S. detainees, but said that "There is a certain subcategory of individuals who have forfeited their protections under the Geneva Conventions and there is not an obligation to allow access to those individuals.
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Original:  After Kellenberger met with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley, he again was refused permission access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centers, chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
Revised:  After Kellenberger met with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley, he was again refused permission access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centers, chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
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Original:  After Kellenberger met with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley, he was again refused permission access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centers, chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
Revised:  After Kellenberger met with senior officials, including Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld and National Security Adviser Stephen Hadley, he was again refused access to terrorist suspects held in secret detention centers, chief ICRC spokesperson Antonella Notari said on Friday.
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Original: Lead programmer of  , Joe Friend, wrote on his blog that the upcoming version of Microsoft Word (which will be a part of Microsoft Office 2007 suite) will have  editing and publishing functions.
Revised: Lead programmer of Microsoft Word , Joe Friend, wrote on his blog that the upcoming version of Microsoft Word (which will be a part of Microsoft Office 2007 suite) will have editing and publishing functions.
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Original:  He will pay 1,000 and must undergo a substance abuse programme.
Revised:  He is to pay 1,000 and must undergo a substance abuse programme.
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Original: A riot has broken out at the main prison in Haiti and gunshots have been heard inside.
Revised: A riot is in progress at the main prison in Haiti and gunshots have been heard inside.
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Original: A riot is in progress at the main prison in Haiti and gunshots have been heard inside .
Revised: A riot took place at the main prison in Haiti and gunshots have been heard inside .
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Original:  United Nations Peacekeepers are on scene and have surrounded the prison.
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Original:  According to the Associated Press (AP) , at least 100 prisoners are on the roof of the prison and are holding what looks to be 2 dead bodies, however;
Revised:  According to the Associated Press , at least 100 prisoners are on the roof of the prison and are holding what looks to be 2 dead bodies, however;
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Original:  The AP also reports that prisoners are saying "freedom or death" and are holding a banner saying "Justice.   
Revised:  Prisoners were heard chanting "freedom or death" and are holding a banner saying "Justice. 
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Original:  The AP also reports that prisoners are saying "freedom or death" and are holding a banner saying "Justice.   
Revised:  The AP also reports that prisoners are saying "freedom or death" and held a banner saying "Justice. 
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