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Original:    &   2008 COMPUTEX Taipei, famed as the 2nd-largest ICT trade fair, recently closed on June7 at Taipei World Trade Center Exhibition Hall 1  3  and TWTC Nangang.
Revised:  & 2008 COMPUTEX Taipei, famed as the 2nd-largest ICT trade fair, recently closed on June7 at Taipei World Trade Center Exhibition Hall 1 - 3 and TWTC Nangang.
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Original:  as   [   " Design " became a neutralization way in several industries ,
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Original:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes  
Revised:  " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes 
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Original:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes  
Revised:  pavilions from " i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes 
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Original:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes  
Revised:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes 
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Original:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes  
Revised:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " Taipei Pack " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes 
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Original:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes  
Revised:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Not only the shows, the TAITRA also provided several special coupon cards for international businesspeople for discounts in several local department stores, hotels, and gourmet stores to rise up the tourism industry. 
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Original:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes  
Revised:  pavilions from " d i award of COMPUTEX ", "Taiwan Design Innovation", and " 2008 Design Think Forum " were highly respected by ICT, design, creative and cultural industries . Besides of Mega Trends Pavilions including products from medical electronics, wireless broadband, embedded system, and car electronics, all prepared to warm up for the 2008 TAITRONICS Autumn, international companies from South Korea, Japan, and Hong Kong all hosted their own pavilions to catch the buyers' eyes Related New
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Original: A good example is the organization of three theme shows for food and packaging industries - "Food Taipei", "Foodtech Taipei", and "Taipei Pack", a collective with different cultures from twenty-seven countries including United States, South Korea, Canada, Japan, Sri Lanka, Austria, Philippines, Chile, Malaysia, Spain, Fiji, Poland, and six nations from Africa.
Revised: A good example was the organization of three theme shows for food and packaging industries - "Food Taipei", "Foodtech Taipei", and "Taipei Pack", a collective with different cultures from twenty-seven countries including United States, South Korea, Canada, Japan, Sri Lanka, Austria, Philippines, Chile, Malaysia, Spain, Fiji, Poland, and six nations from Africa.
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Original:  Ireland is the first state to reject the treaty .
Revised:  Ireland is the first state to reject the treaty 
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Original:  The treaty came about as a reworking of the E.U. Constitution, rejected by refernda in France and the Netherlands in 2005.
Revised:  which came about as a reworking of the E.U. Constitution, rejected by refernda in France and the Netherlands in 2005.
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Original: A referendum in Ireland proposing the country's ratification of the Treaty of Lisbon has been rejected by the electorate despite near universal support from the countries political establishment.
Revised: A referendum in Ireland proposing the country's ratification of the Treaty of Lisbon has been rejected by the electorate despite near universal support from the country's political establishment.
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Original: It replaced the ill-fated E.U. Constitution, which was rejected by French and Dutch voters in 2005.
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Original:  Ireland is the first state to reject the treaty which came about as a reworking of the E.U. Constitution, rejected by refernda in France and the Netherlands in 2005.
Revised:  Ireland is the first state to reject the treaty which came about as a reworking of the E.U. Constitution, rejected by referenda in France and the Netherlands in 2005.
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Original:  " The Treaty is not dead," said European Commission President José Manuel Barroso.
Revised:  The Treaty is not dead," said European Commission President José Manuel Barroso.
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Original:  After a navigational system failed due to a mistake entering the jet's position the plane struggled to return to London Heathrow under Air Traffic Control's guidance as the Polish pilots struggled to understand w:English language| English
Revised:  After a navigational system failed due to a mistake entering the jet's position the plane struggled to return to London Heathrow under Air Traffic Control's guidance as the Polish pilots struggled to understand English
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Original:  After a navigational system failed due to a mistake entering the jet's position the plane struggled to return to London Heathrow under Air Traffic Control's guidance as the Polish pilots struggled to understand English  
Revised:  After a navigational system failed due to a mistake entering the jet's position the plane struggled to return to London Heathrow under Air Traffic Control's guidance as the Polish pilots struggled to understand English . 
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Original: The Boeing 737  was carrying 89 passengers bound for Warsaw, but ran into trouble immediatly after takeoff because the co-pilot entered an Easterly longitude instead of a Westerly one.
Revised: The Boeing 737 , was carrying 89 passengers bound for Warsaw, but ran into trouble immediatly after takeoff because the co-pilot entered an Easterly longitude instead of a Westerly one.
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Original:  The error occured because Heathrow is just to the West of the nearby Prime Meridian Line    
Revised:  The error occured because Heathrow is just to the West of the nearby Prime Meridian Line . 
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Original:  At the end of the emergency, the crew finally made visual contact with the runway at Heathrow and landed safely     
Revised:  At the end of the emergency, the crew finally made visual contact with the runway at Heathrow and landed safely . 
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Original: LOT FLight 282, a Boeing 737, was carrying 89 passengers bound for Warsaw, but ran into trouble immediatly after takeoff because the co-pilot entered an Easterly longitude instead of a Westerly one.
Revised: LOT Flight 282, a Boeing 737, was carrying 89 passengers bound for Warsaw, but ran into trouble immediatly after takeoff because the co-pilot entered an Easterly longitude instead of a Westerly one.
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Original: LOT FLight 282, a Boeing 737, was carrying 89 passengers bound for Warsaw, but ran into trouble immediatly after takeoff because the co-pilot entered an Easterly longitude instead of a Westerly one.
Revised: LOT FLight 282, a Boeing 737, was carrying 89 passengers bound for Warsaw, but ran into trouble immediately after takeoff because the co-pilot entered an Easterly longitude instead of a Westerly one.
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Original:  The error occured because Heathrow is just to the West of the nearby Prime Meridian Line.
Revised:  The error occurred because Heathrow is just to the West of the nearby Prime Meridian Line.
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Original:  However, the aircraft wandered lost around the sorounding airspace for the next 27 minutes because the pilots had such a poor grasp of English.
Revised:  However, the aircraft wandered lost around the surrounding airspace for the next 27 minutes because the pilots had such a poor grasp of English.
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Original:  The pilots, who still had some standby instruments functioning, were unable to follow the instructions and several times the aircraft was turned in the exact opposite direction to that comanded by ATC.
Revised:  The pilots, who still had some standby instruments functioning, were unable to follow the instructions and several times the aircraft was turned in the exact opposite direction to that commanded by ATC.
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Original: Image:Virgin Blue 737.jpg|A Virgin Blue Boeing 737]] Australian airline Virgin Blue is to increase it's faresthat will add an average $5-$10  to most airfares and cease it's Sydney to Prosperine route in July 2008 and Melbourne to Darwin route in August 2008 in order to cut costs due to the airline's fuel bill rising above $500 million, which is up 21 per cent on the last financial year.
Revised: Image:Virgin Blue 737.jpg|A Virgin Blue Boeing 737]] Australian airline Virgin Blue plans to increase its fares, making for an average additional $5-$10 to most airfares and cease it's Sydney to Prosperine route in July 2008 and Melbourne to Darwin route in August 2008 in order to cut costs due to the airline's fuel bill rising above $500 million, which is up 21 per cent on the last financial year.
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Original: Image:Virgin Blue 737.jpg|A Virgin Blue Boeing 737]] Australian airline Virgin Blue is to increase it's faresthat will add an average $5-$10  to most airfares and cease it's Sydney to Prosperine route in July 2008 and Melbourne to Darwin route in August 2008 in order to cut costs due to the airline's fuel bill rising above $500 million, which is up 21 per cent on the last financial year.
Revised: Image:Virgin Blue 737.jpg|A Virgin Blue Boeing 737]] Australian airline Virgin Blue is to increase it's faresthat will add an average $5-$10 charge to most airfares and cease it's Sydney to Prosperine route in July 2008 and Melbourne to Darwin route in August 2008 in order to cut costs due to the airline's fuel bill rising above $500 million, which is up 21 per cent on the last financial year.
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Original: Image:Virgin Blue 737.jpg|A Virgin Blue Boeing 737]] Australian airline Virgin Blue is to increase it's faresthat will add an average $5-$10  to most airfares and cease it's Sydney to Prosperine route in July 2008 and Melbourne to Darwin route in August 2008 in order to cut costs due to the airline's fuel bill rising above $500 million, which is up 21 per cent on the last financial year.
Revised: Image:Virgin Blue 737.jpg|A Virgin Blue Boeing 737]] Australian airline Virgin Blue is to increase it's faresthat will add an average $5-$10 to most airfares . The airline will also cease its Sydney to Prosperine route in July 2008 and Melbourne to Darwin route in August 2008 in order to cut costs due to the airline's fuel bill rising above $500 million, which is up 21 per cent on the last financial year.
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Original: A hydrogen sulphide leak at a fertiliser factory in China has left six people dead and a further 28 killed .
Revised: A hydrogen sulphide leak at a fertiliser factory in China has left six people dead and a further 28 ill .
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Original:  The injured received treatment but are said to be in a stable condition.
Revised:  The injured received treatment and are said to be in a stable condition.
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Original:  China's industries have a poor saety record, with coal mines  the worst, suffering 3,800 deaths last year according to government statisics.
Revised:  China's industries have a poor safety record, with coal mines the worst, suffering 3,800 deaths last year according to government statisics.
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Original:  China's industries have a poor saety record, with coal mines  the worst, suffering 3,800 deaths last year according to government statisics.
Revised:  China's industries have a poor saety record, with coal mines having the worst, suffering 3,800 deaths last year according to government statisics.
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Original:  The government also said that 101,480 people died last year in road and industrial accidents  and although no further elaboration was given  it is thought a fifth of them were due to industrial accidents
Revised:  The government also said that 101,480 people died last year in road and industrial accidents , and although no further elaboration was given it is thought a fifth of them were due to industrial accidents
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Original:  The government also said that 101,480 people died last year in road and industrial accidents  and although no further elaboration was given  it is thought a fifth of them were due to industrial accidents
Revised:  The government also said that 101,480 people died last year in road and industrial accidents and although no further elaboration was given , it is thought a fifth of them were due to industrial accidents
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Original:  POlice have reported that "a suicide attacker drove his way into the main gate of the prison, it was very strong and destroyed the gate and two sides of the surrounding wall.  
Revised:  Police have reported that "a suicide attacker drove his way into the main gate of the prison, it was very strong and destroyed the gate and two sides of the surrounding wall. 
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Original:  POlice have reported that "a suicide attacker drove his way into the main gate of the prison, it was very strong and destroyed the gate and two sides of the surrounding wall.  
Revised:  POlice have reported that "a suicide attacker drove his way into the main gate of the prison, it was very strong and destroyed the gate and two sides of the surrounding wall. " 
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Original:  Reuters, however, reported that the almost all of the 1,150 prisoners have managed to escape  
Revised:  Reuters, however, reported that the almost all of the 1,150 prisoners have managed to escape . 
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Original:  Reuters reports also indicate that approximately half of the inmates at the jail were members of the Taliban .
Revised:  Reuters reports also indicate that approximately half of the inmates at the jail were members of the Taliban 
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Original:  Officials have confirmed that at least two guards died as a result of the incident
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Original: Almost all the prisoners kept in Kandahar jail have escaped after the building was attacked by a Taliban suicide bomber . Police have reported that "a suicide attacker drove his way into the main gate of the prison, it was very strong and destroyed the gate and two sides of the surrounding wall."
Revised: Almost all the prisoners kept in Kandahar jail have escaped after the building was attacked by a Taliban militants . Police have reported that "a suicide attacker drove his way into the main gate of the prison, it was very strong and destroyed the gate and two sides of the surrounding wall."
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Original:  Officials have confirmed that at least two guards died as a result of  the incident.
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Original: Almost all the prisoners kept in Kandahar jail have escaped after the building was attacked by Taliban militants.
Revised: Almost all the prisoners kept in jail have escaped after the building was attacked by Taliban militants.
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Original:  The First Nations native children in the residential school system were forced to assimilate into non-native culture, were often victims of physical and/or sexual abuse, and were exposed to poor sanitation and a lack of medical care.
Revised:  The First Nations native children in the residential school system were forced to assimilate into non-native culture, were at times victims of physical and/or sexual abuse, and were exposed to poor sanitation and a lack of medical care.
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Original:  Liberal leader Stéphane Dion suspects that other Conservatives think similarly, asking, "who of the others think like him?  
Revised:  Liberal leader Stéphane Dion suspects that other Conservatives think similarly, asking, "who of the others think like him? " 
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Original:  Liberal leader Stéphane Dion suspects that other Conservatives think similarly, asking, "who of the others think like him?  
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Original: The Cedar River at Cedar Rapids crested today at a record-breaking 31.1 feet, rearly 20 feet above flood stage.
Revised: The Cedar River at Cedar Rapids crested today at a record-breaking 31.1 feet, nearly 20 feet above flood stage.
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Original:  Besides of the announcements and M-Taiwan pavilion , the WiMAX Forum Taiwan Chapter also held the "Open House of M-Taiwan WiMAX Application Lab" to demonstrate the R&D achievements in Hsinchu on June 3 - 4, driving more discussions between industrial businesspeople especially in Taiwan
Revised:  Besides of the announcements and M-Taiwan Pavilion showcase , the WiMAX Forum Taiwan Chapter also held the "Open House of M-Taiwan WiMAX Application Lab" to demonstrate the R&D achievements in Hsinchu on June 3 - 4, driving more discussions between industrial businesspeople especially in Taiwan
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Original:  As of June 14, 19:00 local time, approximately 10 people are missing  and 630 are isolated in three places due to land slides, NHK reports.
Revised:  As of June 14, 19:00 local time, approximately 10 people are missing , and 630 are isolated in three places due to land slides, NHK reports.
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Original:  Mainichi Shinbun reports many land slides happened in mountainous areas, cut down roads and several neighborhoods are separated from the others.
Revised:  Mainichi Shinbun reports many land slides happened in mountainous areas, cut down roads and several neighbourhoods are separated from the others.
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Original:  As of June 14, 19:00 local time, approximately 10 people are missing, and 630 are isolated in three places due to land slides, NHK reports.
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Original:  Mainichi Shinbun reports many land slides happened in mountainous areas, cut down roads and several neighbourhoods are separated from the others.
Revised:  Mainichi Shinbun reports many land slides happened in mountainous areas, cutting down roads and several neighbourhoods are separated from the others.
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Original:  Mainichi Shinbun reports many land slides happened in mountainous areas, cut down roads and several neighbourhoods are separated from the others.
Revised:  Mainichi Shinbun reports many land slides happened in mountainous areas, cut down roads and several neighborhoods are separated from the others.
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Original:  Mainichi indicated that Iwate and Miyagi Prefectures are severely damaged so that both governors invoke Disaster Aid Act to be effective in Ichinoseki and Kurikoma respectively  
Revised:  Mainichi indicated that Iwate and Miyagi Prefectures are severely damaged so that both governors invoke Disaster Aid Act to be effective in Ichinoseki and Kurikoma respectively . 
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Original:  The quake struck at 8:43 am local time, located about 5 miles ( 8 km) underground, approximately 280 miles (451 km ) north of Tokyo in the northern prefecture of Iwate, which was felt as far away as the Capital.
Revised:  This earthquake at 8:43 am local time, located about 5 miles ( 8 km) underground, approximately 280 miles (451 km ) north of Tokyo in the northern prefecture of Iwate, which was felt as far away as the Capital.
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