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Original: Topics discussed will include the U.S. "Star Wars" missile defence system, the future of NORAD (North American Aerospace Defence Command), combatting of AIDS and other disease in Africa, and cracking down on illegal activities on the U.S.-Canada border.
Revised: Topics discussed included the U.S. "Star Wars" missile defence system, the future of NORAD (North American Aerospace Defence Command), combatting of AIDS and other disease in Africa, and cracking down on illegal activities on the U.S.-Canada border.
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Original:  They will also discuss trade issues including beef, lumber and prescription drugs.
Revised:  They also discussed trade issues including beef, lumber and prescription drugs.
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Original:  They also report 15,000 people marched against Bush in Ottawa on the 30th and haveText Photos , and a Video of the protests.
Revised:  They also report 15,000 people marched against Bush in Ottawa on the 30th and have text photos , and a Video of the protests.
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Original:  They also report 15,000 people marched against Bush in Ottawa on the 30th and haveText Photos , and a Video of the protests.
Revised:  They also report 15,000 people marched against Bush in Ottawa on the 30th and haveText Photos , and a video of the protests.
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Original: United States President George W. Bush makes his first official state visit to Canada this week.
Revised: United States President George W. Bush made his first official state visit to Canada this week.
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Original:  Topics discussed included the U.S. "Star Wars" missile defence system, the future of NORAD (North American Aerospace Defence Command), combatting of AIDS and other disease in Africa, and cracking down on illegal activities on the U.S.-Canada border.
Revised:  Topics discussed included the U.S. "Star Wars" missile defence system, the future of NORAD (North American Aerospace Defence Command), combatting of AIDS and other diseases in Africa, and cracking down on illegal activities on the U.S.-Canada border.
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Original:  They also discussed trade issues including beef, lumber  and prescription drugs.
Revised:  They also discussed trade issues including beef, lumber , and prescription drugs.
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Original:  Protesters clashed with riot police in Ottawa briefly on Tuesday in a break from what has been for the most part a calm , series of demonstrations.
Revised:  Protesters clashed with riot police in Ottawa briefly on Tuesday in a break from what has been for the most part a calm series of demonstrations.
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Original:  Nobody ever expected something like this from him," Perkovic said . Perkovic also said that Poplawski was sacred of "the Obama gun ban that's on the way" and "didn't like our rights being infringed upon."
Revised:  Nobody ever expected something like this from him," Perkovic said Perkovic also said that Poplawski was sacred of "the Obama gun ban that's on the way" and "didn't like our rights being infringed upon."
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Original:  Nobody ever expected something like this from him," Perkovic said . Perkovic also said that Poplawski was sacred of "the Obama gun ban that's on the way" and "didn't like our rights being infringed upon."
Revised:  Nobody ever expected something like this from him," Perkovic said . , adding that Poplawski was sacred of "the Obama gun ban that's on the way" and "didn't like our rights being infringed upon."
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Original:  Nobody ever expected something like this from him," Perkovic said . Perkovic also said that Poplawski was sacred of "the Obama gun ban that's on the way" and "didn't like our rights being infringed upon."
Revised:  Nobody ever expected something like this from him," Perkovic said . Perkovic also said that Poplawski was scared of "the Obama gun ban that's on the way" and "didn't like our rights being infringed upon."
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Original: The shooting suspect's mother was also believed to be in the house at the time.
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Original:  During the trial in Hamilton, Aziga also faced 11 counts of aggravated sexual assault and was convicted in all but one of these charges where this was replaced by conviction on a lesser charge of attempted aggravated sexual assault.
Revised:  During the trial in Hamilton, Aziga also faced 11 counts of aggravated sexual assault and was convicted in all but one of these charges . The 11th charge was replaced by conviction on a lesser charge of attempted aggravated sexual assault.
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Original:  Average temperatures in the Antarctic peninsula have increased by about 2.5 degrees Centigrad (3.8 degrees Farhrenheit) in the past fifty years
Revised:  Average temperatures in the Antarctic peninsula have increased by about 2.5 degrees Centigrade (3.8 degrees Farhrenheit) in the past fifty years
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Original:  Average temperatures in the Antarctic peninsula have increased by about 2.5 degrees Centigrade (3.8 degrees Farhrenheit ) in the past fifty years
Revised:  Average temperatures in the Antarctic peninsula have increased by about 2.5 degrees Centigrade (3.8 degrees Fahrenheit ) in the past fifty years
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Original: In February of last year , the shelf lost 425 square kilometres (164 square miles) of ice, followed by a loss of another 62 square miles in May . Scientists are wondering whether the cause of the incident is related to global warming.
Revised: In February of last year , the shelf lost 425 square kilometres (164 square miles) of ice, followed by a loss of another 62 square miles in May . Most scientists are believe that the root cause of the incident is related to global warming.
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Original: In February of last year , the shelf lost 425 square kilometres (164 square miles) of ice, followed by a loss of another 62 square miles in May . Scientists are wondering whether the cause of the incident is related to global warming.
Revised: In February of last year , the shelf lost 425 square kilometres (164 square miles) of ice, followed by a loss of another 62 square miles in May . Scientists are wondering whether the cause of the incident is due to global warming.
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Original: Most scientists are believe that the root cause of the incident is due to global warming.
Revised: Most scientists believe that the root cause of the incident is due to global warming.
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Original: Most scientists are believe that the root cause of the incident is due to global warming.
Revised: Most scientists are believe that the incident is further evidence of global warming.
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Original:  Average temperatures in the Antarctic peninsula have increased by about 2.5 degrees Centigrade (3.8 degrees Fahrenheit) in the past fifty years
Revised:  Average temperatures in the Antarctic peninsula have increased by about 2.5 degrees Celsius (3.8 degrees Fahrenheit) in the past fifty years
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Original:  Authorities from the United States, Japan, and South Korea confirm that the rocket lifted off at 11.32 local time ( 02.30 GMT) on Sunday April 5, 2009.
Revised:  Authorities from the United States, Japan, and South Korea confirm that the rocket lifted off at 11.32 local time ( 0230 GMT) on Sunday April 5, 2009.
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Original:  America, Japan and South Korea will discuss the launch at an emergency UN Security Council meeting at 15 : 00 EDT (1900 GMT).
Revised:  America, Japan and South Korea will discuss the launch at an emergency UN Security Council meeting at 15 00 EDT (1900 GMT).
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Original:  Authorities from the United States, Japan, and South Korea confirm that the rocket lifted off at 1630 local time ( 0230 GMT) on Sunday April 5, 2009.
Revised:  Authorities from the United States, Japan, and South Korea confirm that the rocket lifted off at 1630 local time ( 02.30 GMT) on Sunday April 5, 2009.
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Original:  America, Japan and South Korea will discuss the launch at an emergency UN Security Council meeting at 15  00 EDT (1900 GMT).
Revised:  America, Japan and South Korea will discuss the launch at an emergency UN Security Council meeting at 15 : 00 EDT (1900 GMT).
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Original:  North Korea claims that the rocket is a launch vehicle to orbit a satellite, however its neighbours suggest that this is simply a cover for a long-range missile test, a missile that could potentially hit Alaska and the West Coast of the United States .
Revised:  North Korea claims that the rocket is a launch vehicle to orbit a satellite, however its neighbours suggest that this is simply a cover for a long-range missile test, a missile that could potentially hit Alaska and the West Coast of the United States 
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Original:  The launch of the rocket failed and the payload and second stage have fallen into the Pacific Ocean
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Original:  A South Korean source told the South Korean Yunhap news agency that the rocket did appear to be carrying a satellite.
Revised:  A South Korean source told the South Korean Yonhap news agency that the rocket did appear to be carrying a satellite.
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Original: Save the Children said that Afghan minors in Rome have increased to 264 in 2007 from 32 in 2004.
Revised: Save the Children said that Afghan minors in Rome have increased to 264 in 2007 from 32 in 
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Original: The children, who do not speak Italian, are under the care of the Rome's Social Services.
Revised: The children, who do not speak Italian, are under the care of Rome's Social Services.
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Original:  Efforts are being made by interpreters to identify these young ones who traveled without parental care.
Revised:  Efforts are being made by interpreters to identify the children who traveled without parental care.
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Original:  They had spent nights sleeping in a standing position in filthy sewer pipes after removing the manhole covers and some youngsters were found in a sickly condition.
Revised:  They had spent nights sleeping in a standing position in filthy sewer pipes after removing the manhole covers and some of them were found in a sickly condition.
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Original:  According to the newspaper La Reppublica , the children had stowed away on trailer trucks traveling from Turkey and Greece.
Revised:  According to the newspaper La Repubblica , the children had stowed away on trailer trucks traveling from Turkey and Greece.
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Original:  All drivers earned only half possible points for the after 31 laps  
Revised:  All drivers earned only half possible points counted after 31 laps 
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Original:  All drivers earned only half possible points for the after 31 laps  
Revised:  All drivers earned only half possible points for the after 31 laps . 
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Original: Poland and China experts have come to survey the Red River Floodway, and Dennis Walaker, mayor of Fargo, North Dakota recognises the need for Red River flood defences down river.
Revised: Polish and Chinese experts have come to survey the Red River Floodway, and Dennis Walaker, mayor of Fargo, North Dakota recognises the need for Red River flood defences down river.
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Original:  The child was hospitalised on March 28, and is reported to be in critical condition after treatment  .
Revised:  The child was hospitalised on March 28, reported to be in critical condition after treatment .
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Original: The return of United States war casualties The media were today allowed to cover the return of an airman killed in Afghanistan  ending an 18-year ban that had prevented the publication of images of American war casualties.
Revised: The return of United States war casualties The media were today allowed to cover the return of an airman killed in Afghanistan , ending an 18-year ban that had prevented the publication of images of American war casualties.
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Original:  The military allowed media access to the service in Dover Air Force Base in Delaware for the return of the body of Air Force Staff Sgt.
Revised:  The military allowed media access to the service in Dover Air Force Base in Delaware for the return of the body of Air Force Staff Sergeant
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Original:  Phillip Myers of Hopewell, Va , after the family had given permission.
Revised:  Phillip Myers of Hopewell, of Virginia , after the family had given permission.
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Original:  The ban had been enacted by President George H. W. Bush in 1991 during the Persian Gulf War  apparently as a way to shield grieving families.
Revised:  The ban had been enacted by President George H. W. Bush in 1991 during the Persian Gulf War , apparently as a way to shield grieving families.
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Original:  Giuliani lives in L'Aquila and made his findings while at the National Institute of Nuclear Physics in the nearby Abruzzo region   .
Revised:  Giuliani lives in L'Aquila and made his findings while at the National Institute of Nuclear Physics in the nearby Abruzzo region . .
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Original: Gioacchino Giuliani, a researcher at a Gran Sasso physics institute in Italy, claims that he predicted the powerful earthquake that struck the country on Monday, but was dismissed by the authorities as a scaremongerer .
Revised: Gioacchino Giuliani, a researcher at a Gran Sasso physics institute in Italy, claims that he predicted the powerful earthquake that struck the country on Monday, but was dismissed by the authorities as a scaremonger .
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Original:  Last month, cars with loudspeakers drove around the area, broadcasting the researcher's warning that an quake would soon strike.
Revised:  Last month, cars with loudspeakers drove around the area, broadcasting the researcher's warning that a quake would soon strike.
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Original:  He was then reported to the authorities  making false alarms, and was obliged to remove his findings from the internet.
Revised:  He was then reported to the authorities for making false alarms, and was obliged to remove his findings from the internet.
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Original: Giuliani holds the patent on a device measuring atmospheric levels of radon in order to predict earthquakes.
Revised: Giuliani holds a patent on a device measuring atmospheric levels of radon in order to predict earthquakes.
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Original:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) the moment magnitude 6.3 earthquake struck Central Italy at 3:32 a.m. local time on April 6. So far, over 150 people have been killed with over 1,500 injured and tens of thousands of buildings damaged or destroyed.
Revised:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) the moment magnitude 6.3 earthquake struck Central Italy at 3:32 a.m. local time on April 6. So far, over 150 people have been reported dead with over 1,500 injured and tens of thousands of buildings damaged or destroyed.
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Original:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) the moment magnitude 6.3 earthquake struck Central Italy at 3:32 a.m. local time on April 6. So far, over 150 people have been reported dead with over 1,500 injured and tens of thousands of buildings damaged or destroyed.
Revised:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) the moment magnitude 6.3 earthquake struck Central Italy at 3:32 a.m. local time on April 6. So far, over 150 people have been killed with over 1,500 injured and tens of thousands of buildings damaged or destroyed.
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Original:  The Corner Gas hit television comedy sitcom will air it's last episode “Good Night, You've Been Great” April 13 after six seasons.
Revised:  The Corner Gas hit television comedy will air it's last episode “Good Night, You've Been Great” April 13 after six seasons.
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Original:  The Corner Gas hit television comedy sitcom will air it's last episode “Good Night, You've Been Great” April 13 after six seasons.
Revised:  The Corner Gas hit television comedy sitcom will air it's last episode “Good Night, You've Been Great” April 13.
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Original:  On Monday, April 6  , Brad Wall, Premier of Saskatchewan signed the proclamation that April 13 , 2009 shall be declared “Corner Gas Day” to honour six seasons of the award winning sitcom .
Revised:  On Monday, April 6 , Brad Wall, signed the proclamation that April 13 , 2009 shall be declared “Corner Gas Day” to honour six seasons of the award winning sitcom .
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Original:  On Monday, April 6  , Brad Wall, Premier of Saskatchewan signed the proclamation that April 13 , 2009 shall be declared “Corner Gas Day” to honour six seasons of the award winning sitcom .
Revised:  On Monday, April 6 , Brad Wall, Premier of Saskatchewan signed the proclamation that April 13 shall be declared “Corner Gas Day” to honour six seasons of the award winning sitcom .
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Original:  The Corner Gas hit television comedy  will air it's last episode “Good Night, You've Been Great” April 13.
Revised:  The Corner Gas hit television comedy which will air it's last episode “Good Night, You've Been Great” April 13.
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Original:  The Canadian comedy series aired by CTV Television Network has been described by many as the most successful Canadian show made, and currently is shown in over two dozen countries.
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Original:  The show was nominated 80 times for awards, and has won six Gemini awards, one of which was Best Comedy Series.
Revised:  The show has been honoured with nover 80 times for awards, and has won six Gemini awards, one of which was Best Comedy Series.
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Original:  The show was nominated 80 times for awards, and has won six Gemini awards, one of which was Best Comedy Series.
Revised:  The show was nominated 80 nominations, and diverse accolades and awards such as six Gemini awards, one of which was Best Comedy Series.
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Original:  On Monday, April 6 Saskatchewan Premier, Brad Wall, signed the proclamation that April 13 shall be declared “Corner Gas Day” to honour six seasons of the award winning sitcom, Corner Gas the hit television comedy which will air it's last episode “Good Night, You've Been Great” April 13, 2009.
Revised:  On Monday, April 6 Saskatchewan Premier, Brad Wall, signed the proclamation that April 13 shall be declared “Corner Gas Day” to honour six seasons of the award winning sitcom, Corner Gas the hit television comedy which will air its last episode “Good Night, You've Been Great” April 13, 2009.
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Original:  Wall was filmed in a scene where he was getting his gas tank filled up at the Corner Gas service station.
Revised:  Wall was filmed in a scene in which he was getting his gas tank filled up at the Corner Gas service station.
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Original:  CNN reports that Iraq's proximity to Turkey was the reason behind choosing Iraq over Afganistan .
Revised:  CNN reports that Iraq's proximity to Turkey was the reason behind choosing Iraq over Afghanistan .
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Original: American President Barack Obama made an unannounced visit to Iraq today, the New York Times reported Tuesday.
Revised: American President Barack Obama made an unannounced visit to Iraq today, The New York Times reported Tuesday.
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Original:  American troops are slated to leave Iraq by August 2010, with the New York Times reporting that troop levels will continue to be high until Iraq's federal elections in December.
Revised:  American troops are slated to leave Iraq by August 2010, with The New York Times reporting that troop levels will continue to be high until Iraq's federal elections in December.
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Original: |left]] Vermont is now the fourth state in the United States to legalize gay marriages .
Revised: |left]] Vermont is now the fourth state in the United States where same-sex marriage is legal .
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Original: Vermont lawmakers overrode Governor Jim Douglas' veto on Tuesday to permit gays and lesbians in the state to marry.
Revised: Vermont lawmakers bannedGovernor Jim Douglas' veto on Tuesday to permit gays and lesbians in the state to marry.
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Original: Vermont lawmakers overrode Governor Jim Douglas' veto on Tuesday to permit gays and lesbians in the state to marry.
Revised: Vermont lawmakers overrode Governor Jim Douglas' to permit gays and lesbians in the state to marry.
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Original: Garuda Pilots’ Association president Stephanus Gerardus and Napitupulu of the Federation of Indonesian Pilots both commented that the case should not have been in a crimminal court at all but in an aviation court.
Revised: Garuda Pilots’ Association president Stephanus Gerardus and Napitupulu of the Federation of Indonesian Pilots both commented that the case should not have been in a criminal court at all but in an aviation court.
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Original:  Garardus commented that “Pilots will be afraid to land their planes because of the threat of imprisonment.” Caroline Mellish, sister of Australin journalist Morgan Mellish who died on the flight, also said the sentence was light.
Revised:  Garardus commented that “Pilots will be afraid to land their planes because of the threat of imprisonment.” Caroline Mellish, sister of Australian journalist Morgan Mellish who died on the flight, also said the sentence was light.
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Original:  Had the airport been aware of the problems on board, they could have readied Aircraft Rescue and Firefeighting crews to prevent or contain the fire when the plane departed the runway.
Revised:  Had the airport been aware of the problems on board, they could have readied Aircraft Rescue and Firefighting crews to prevent or contain the fire when the plane departed the runway.
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Original:  Garardus commented that “ Pilots will be afraid to land their planes because of the threat of imprisonment. ”
Revised:  Garardus commented that " Pilots will be afraid to land their planes because of the threat of imprisonment. ”
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Original:  Garardus commented that “ Pilots will be afraid to land their planes because of the threat of imprisonment. ”
Revised:  Garardus commented that “ Pilots will be afraid to land their planes because of the threat of imprisonment. "
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Original: The court ruled that Article 479G(b) of the Criminal Code had been breached by Komar - negligence resulting in death.
Revised: The court ruled that Article 479G(b) of the Criminal Code had been breached by Komar — negligence resulting in death.
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Original:  He was sentenced to two years , half of what prosecutors were seeking.
Revised:  He was sentenced to two years in prison, half the term prosecutors were seeking.
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Original:  Lead prosecutor Mudin Aristo said that " We 're considering [appealing] the verdict." M. Assegaf, Komar's lawyer, has already said that he will appeal.
Revised:  Lead prosecutor Mudin Aristo said that " we 're considering [appealing] the verdict." M. Assegaf, Komar's lawyer, has already said that he will appeal.
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Original:  | The case should not have been tried under that article [479G(b)], which is used to regulate terrorists.
Revised:  " The case should not have been tried under that article [479G(b)], which is used to regulate terrorists.
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Original:  Captain Marwoto is not a terrorist , "  said Assegaf.
Revised:  Captain Marwoto is not a terrorist " said Assegaf.
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Original:  Captain Marwoto is not a terrorist , "  said Assegaf.
Revised:  Captain Marwoto is not a terrorist , " , said Assegaf.
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Original:  Then Australian foreign minister Alexander Downer commented that  it seems a very light sentence frankly.
Revised:  Then-Australian foreign minister Alexander Downer commented that it seems a very light sentence frankly.
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