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Original:  "While the degree of the turn has important implications regarding potential impacts to Bermuda," the National Hurricane Center said, "it is much too early to determine if Berth will actually threaten that island."
Revised:  "While the degree of the turn has important implications regarding potential impacts to Bermuda," the National Hurricane Center said, "it is much too early to determine if Bertha will actually threaten that island."
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Original:   US President George W. Bush met with, among others, the President of Russia.
Revised:  George Bush with the President of Russia US President George W. Bush met with, among others, the President of Russia.
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Revised:  George Bush with the President of Tanzania earlier today Another issue discussed was the aid provisions for Africa. The politicians were asked to take action on the promises made after the 2005 G8 summit, which included doubling aid to Africa. As part of this, many members of the G8 met with African leaders
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Original:  As part of this, many members of the G8 met with African leaders  
Revised:  As part of this, many members of the G8 met with African leaders . 
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Original:  Before the press ocnference , the two leaders met to discuss international issues .
Revised:  Before the press conference , the two leaders met to discuss international issues .
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Original:  Before the press ocnference , the two leaders met to discuss international issues .
Revised:  Before the press ocnference , the two leaders met to discuss international affairs .
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Original:  The politicians were asked to take action on the promises made after the 2005 G8 summit, which included doubling aid to Africa.
Revised:  The politicana were asked to take action on the promises made after the 2005 G8 summit, which included doubling aid to Africa.
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Original:  The politicians were asked to take action on the promises made after the 2005 G8 summit, which included doubling aid to Africa.
Revised:  The politicians were asked to take action on the promises made during the 2005 G8 summit, which included doubling aid to Africa.
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Original:  As part of this, many members of the G8 met with African leaders .
Revised:  As part of the discussion on aid in Africa, some African leaders met with the leaders of G8 nations .
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Original:  In the meeting several issues were discussed, including the current situation in Zimbabwe, which UK Prime Minister Gordon Brown said was ruled by an “illegitmate regime.”
Revised:  During the first day of the summit several issues were discussed, including the current situation in Zimbabwe, which UK Prime Minister Gordon Brown said was ruled by an “illegitmate regime.”
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Original: The 2008 G8 summit  of the leaders of the world's eight most powerful nations  launched today in Hokkaido, Japan.
Revised: The 2008 G8 summit , a gathering of the leaders of the world's eight most powerful nations launched today in Hokkaido, Japan.
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Original: The 2008 G8 summit  of the leaders of the world's eight most powerful nations  launched today in Hokkaido, Japan.
Revised: The 2008 G8 summit of the leaders of the world's eight most powerful nations , launched today in Hokkaido, Japan.
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Original:  Before the press conference, the two leaders met to discuss international affairs.
Revised:  Prior to the press conference, the two leaders met to discuss international affairs.
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Original:  Fukada said that they had a very substantive meeting with President Bush for about an hour.
Revised:  Fukada noted that it had been a very substantive meeting with President Bush for about an hour.
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Original:  Fukada said that they had a very substantive meeting with President Bush for about an hour.
Revised:  Fukada said that they had a very substantive meeting , lasting about an hour.
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Original:  He also said that  "in the meeting, we first shared the view that peace and stability in this region in the past decades have been maintained, thanks to the Japan-U.S. alliance."
Revised:  He also said that , "in the meeting, we first shared the view that peace and stability in this region in the past decades have been maintained, thanks to the Japan-U.S. alliance."
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Original:  George Bush with the President of Russia US President George W. Bush met with, among others, the President of Russia.
Revised:  George Bush with the President of Russia Bush met with, among others, the President of Russia.
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Original:  After the meeting Bush said that the meeting was long and meaningful .
Revised:  Afterwards Bush called the meeting long and meaningful .
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Original:  George Bush meeting with the President of Tanzania earlier today Another issue discussed was the aid provisions for Africa.
Revised:  George Bush meeting with the President of Tanzania earlier today Another item on the first day's agenda was aid provisions for Africa.
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Original:  In one of the meetings, George Bush discussed aid with the President of Tanzania, Jakaya Kikwete.
Revised:  In one of the meetings, George Bush discussed aid with the Tanzanian President Jakaya Kikwete.
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Original:  After the meeting, Bush said that "one of the things that's so impressive about his leadership in Tanzania is that the help of the American people is effective help, measurable in the number of people whose lives are being saved, babies are being helped with malaria.
Revised:  After the meeting, Bush commented that "one of the things that's so impressive about his leadership in Tanzania is that the help of the American people is effective help, measurable in the number of people whose lives are being saved, babies are being helped with malaria.
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Original:  After the meeting, Bush commented that " one of the things that's so impressive about his  leadership in Tanzania is that the help of the American people is effective help, measurable in the number of people whose lives are being saved, babies are being helped with malaria  ]  .
Revised:  After the meeting, Bush commented that " One of the things that's so impressive about his leadership in Tanzania is that the help of the American people is effective help, measurable in the number of people whose lives are being saved, babies are being helped with malaria ] .
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Original:  After the meeting, Bush commented that " one of the things that's so impressive about his  leadership in Tanzania is that the help of the American people is effective help, measurable in the number of people whose lives are being saved, babies are being helped with malaria  ]  .
Revised:  After the meeting, Bush commented that " one of the things that's so impressive about his leadership in Tanzania is that the help of the American people is effective help, measurable in the number of people whose lives are being saved, babies are being helped with malaria ... But this success would not have taken place without your ] .
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Original: The 2008 G8 summit, a gathering of the leaders of the world's eight most powerful nations, launched today in Hokkaido, Japan.
Revised: The 2008 G8 summit, a gathering of the leaders of France, United States, United Kingdom, Russia, Germany, Japan, Italy and Canada, began today in Hokkaido, Japan.
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Original:  During the first day of the summit several issues were discussed, including the current situation in Zimbabwe, which UK Prime Minister Gordon Brown said was ruled by an “illegitmate regime.”
Revised:  During the first day of the summit several issues were discussed, including the current situation in Zimbabwe, which UK Prime Minister Gordon Brown said was ruled by an "illegitmate regime"
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Original:  The passenger ferry capsised and sank off Sibuyan island on June 21 during Typhoon Fengshen (known locally as Typhhon Frank) with hundreds of casualties   
Revised:  The passenger ferry capsised and sank off Sibuyan island on June 21 during Typhoon Fengshen (known locally as Typhhon Frank) with hundreds of casualties . 
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Original: Philippines shipping company Sulpicio Lines has asked a court to issue a temporary restraining order  stopping the Board of Marine Inquiry (BMI) from proceding with its investigation into the loss of MV Princess of the Stars.
Revised: Philippines shipping company Sulpicio Lines has asked a court to issue a temporary restraining order (TRO) stopping the Board of Marine Inquiry (BMI) from proceding with its investigation into the loss of MV Princess of the Stars.
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Original:  The company says one comment the board made was "Your vessel is not stable!" "You have no business being a safety officer!   
Revised:  The company says one comment the board made was "Your vessel is not stable!" "You have no business being a safety officer! " 
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Original: Philippines shipping company Sulpicio Lines has asked a court to issue a temporary restraining order (TRO) stopping the Board of Marine Inquiry (BMI) from proceding with its investigation into the loss of MV Princess of the Stars.
Revised: The Philippine shipping company Sulpicio Lines has asked a court to issue a temporary restraining order (TRO) stopping the Board of Marine Inquiry (BMI) from proceding with its investigation into the loss of MV Princess of the Stars.
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Original:  They say "prejudgment" has increased the "pervasive negative publicity" surrounding the line, since negative accusations are most often published in newsapers .
Revised:  They say "prejudgment" has increased the "pervasive negative publicity" surrounding the line, since negative accusations are most often published in newspapers .
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Original:  He told the German newspaper w: Bild am Sonntag he was angry about the exhibit, but it turned out that he had done the attack to win a bet.
Revised:  He told the German newspaper Bild am Sonntag he was angry about the exhibit, but it turned out that he had done the attack to win a bet.
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Original: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds mueseum in w: Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year old man who was arrested but then released.
Revised: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds mueseum in Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year old man who was arrested but then released.
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the 200,000 euro (160,000 pounds) model after it was fixed which could take weeks  
Revised:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the 200,000 euro (160,000 pounds) model after it was fixed which could take weeks . 
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the 200,000 euro (160,000 pounds) model after it was fixed which could take weeks  
Revised:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the 200,000 euro (160,000 pounds) model after it was fixed which could take weeks Related new
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Original: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds mueseum in Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year old man who was arrested but then released.
Revised: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds mueseum in Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year-old man who was arrested but then released.
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Original: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds mueseum in Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year old man who was arrested but then released.
Revised: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds mueseum in Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year old man who was arrested but subsequently released.
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Original:  At the grand opening of the mueseum, the 41-year old German pushed two officers aside who were protecting the exhibit.
Revised:  At the grand opening of the mueseum, the 41-year-old German pushed two officers aside who were protecting the exhibit.
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Original:  The waxwork was criticized around Germany where  generally, Nazi memorabilia or symbols are banned.
Revised:  The waxwork was criticized around Germany where , generally, Nazi memorabilia or symbols are banned.
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the  200,000 euro ( 160,000 pounds ) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
Revised:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the € 200,000 euro ( 160,000 pounds ) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the  200,000 euro ( 160,000 pounds ) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
Revised:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the 200,000 (£ 160,000 pounds ) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the  200,000 euro ( 160,000 pounds ) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
Revised:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the 200,000 euro ( 160,000 ) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
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Original: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds mueseum in Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year-old man who was arrested but subsequently released.
Revised: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds museum in Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year-old man who was arrested but subsequently released.
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Original:  At the grand opening of the mueseum , Frank L. pushed two officers aside who were protecting the exhibit.
Revised:  At the grand opening of the museum , Frank L. pushed two officers aside who were protecting the exhibit.
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the mueseum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
Revised:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the museum argued that he was an important figure in German history, and would reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
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Original: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds museum in Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year-old man who was arrested but subsequently released.
Revised: Hitler's wax model is to return to the Madame Tussauds museum in Berlin, Germany after getting its head ripped off by a 41-year old man who was arrested but subsequently released.
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Original:  At the grand opening of the museum,  Frank L. pushed two officers aside who were protecting the exhibit.
Revised:  At the grand opening of the museum, Frank L. , pushed aside two officers who were protecting the exhibit.
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Original:  He then yelled "No more war!" and proceeded to rip of the wax sculpture's head off.
Revised:  Yelling "No more war!" and proceeded to rip of the wax sculpture's head off.
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Original:  He then yelled "No more war!" and proceeded to rip of the wax sculpture's head off.
Revised:  He then yelled "No more war!" , he proceeded to rip of the wax sculpture's head off.
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Original:  The man was then arrested , but then was released under investigation.
Revised:  The man was arrested but later released pending investigation.
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Original:  He told the German newspaper Bild am Sonntag he was angry about the exhibit , but it turned out that he had done the attack to win a bet started by his friends in a bar.
Revised:  He told the German newspaper Bild am Sonntag he was angry about the exhibit . It has been reported that he had done the attack to win a bet started by his friends in a bar.
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Original:  He told the German newspaper Bild am Sonntag he was angry about the exhibit , but it turned out that he had done the attack to win a bet started by his friends in a bar.
Revised:  He told the German newspaper Bild am Sonntag he was angry about the exhibit , but it turned out that he had committed the act to win a bet started by his friends in a bar.
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Original:  He told the German newspaper Bild am Sonntag he was angry about the exhibit , but it turned out that he had done the attack to win a bet started by his friends in a bar.
Revised:  He told the German newspaper Bild am Sonntag he was angry about the exhibit , but it turned out that he had done the attack to win a bet started by his friends at a bar.
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the museum argued that he was an important figure in German history , and would  reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
Revised:  Critics have argued that it is inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the museum argued that he was an important figure in German history , and would reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the museum argued that he was an important figure in German history , and would  reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
Revised:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the museum has noted that Hitler was an important figure in German history , and would reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the museum argued that he was an important figure in German history , and would  reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
Revised:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the museum argued that he was an important figure in German history . reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
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Original:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the museum argued that he was an important figure in German history , and would  reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after it was fixed which could take weeks.
Revised:  Critics argued that inappropriate to display a person who started a world war, but the museum argued that he was an important figure in German history , and would reinstate the €200,000 (£160,000) model after repairs, which could take weeks.
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Original:  The text of the interview is available belo         
Revised:  The text of the interview is available belo Have you ever run for political office before? DA:No, and I consider that a plus. I will be able to view all issues objectively without prior obligations and debts owed to lobbyists, political action committees, corporations, and politically powerful people. I will answer only to you, the people of America, and I will always put you first. 
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Original:  I'm totally happy that he consented to run as vice presiden 
Revised:  I'm totally happy that he consented to run as vice president. 
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Original: While nearly all  coverage of the 2008 Presidential election has focused on the Democratic and Republican candidates, the race for the White House also includes independents and third-party candidates.
Revised: While nearly all mainstream coverage of the 2008 Presidential election has focused on the Democratic and Republican candidates, the race for the White House also includes independents and third-party candidates.
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Original:  Allen , an independent presidential candidate who registered with the Federal Election Committee in January 2007 .
Revised:  Allen , an independent presidential candidate who registered with the Federal Election Committee in January 2007.
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Original:  It will make economic incentive checks look like the Band-Aids and put significantly more money in our pockets and in business' accounts to pay for health insurance or other needs.
Revised:  It will make economic incentive checks look like Band-Aids and put significantly more money in our pockets and in business' accounts to pay for health insurance or other needs.
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Original:  Is Also a Vet on the boader of Youngstown and Boardman
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Original:  Also in the team are technical advisors from the Federal Aviation Authority, manufacturer Boeing (who bought out McDonnell-Douglas) and engine manufacturer Pratt & Whitney  
Revised:  Also in the team are technical advisors from the Federal Aviation Authority, manufacturer Boeing (who bought out McDonnell-Douglas) and engine manufacturer Pratt & Whitney . 
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Original:  The deceased has been identified as 46-year-old Lon McIntosh, and the co-pilot , Chris James was listed in critical condition after undergoing surgery at a Saltillo hospital.
Revised:  The deceased has been identified as 46-year-old Lon McIntosh, and the co-pilot Chris James, was listed in critical condition after undergoing surgery at a Saltillo hospital.
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Original:  Also in the team are technical advisors from the Federal Aviation Authority, manufacturer Boeing (who bought out McDonnell-Douglas) and engine manufacturer Pratt & Whitney.
Revised:  Also on the team are technical advisors from the Federal Aviation Authority, manufacturer Boeing (who bought out McDonnell-Douglas) and engine manufacturer Pratt & Whitney.
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Original:   The National Hurricane Center says that while it is still too early to tell if Bertha will strike land, residents are being urged to continue to monitor the storm's progress   .
Revised:  The National Hurricane Center says that while it is still too early to tell if Bertha will strike land, residents are being urged to continue to monitor the storm's progress . .
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