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Original:  Navalny, among other facts , references the recent writings in the LiveJournal blog of the airport's Director General Mikhail Vasilenko, who publicly expresses great concerns about the problem described .
Revised:  Navalny, among other things , references the recent writings in the LiveJournal blog of the airport's Director General Mikhail Vasilenko, who publicly expresses great concerns about the problem described .
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Original:  Navalny, among other facts , references the recent writings in the LiveJournal blog of the airport's Director General Mikhail Vasilenko, who publicly expresses great concerns about the problem described .
Revised:  Navalny, among other facts , references the recent writings in the LiveJournal blog of the airport's Director General Mikhail Vasilenko, who has publicly expressed concerns about the problem described .
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Original:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill , there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and extra 21 instances directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He says that, for as long as the landfill has been in existence, there have been 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and extra 21 instances directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
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Original:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill , there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and extra 21 instances directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill , there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying near the airport and extra 21 instances directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
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Original:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill , there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and extra 21 instances directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill , there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and 21 instances directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
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Original:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill , there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and extra 21 instances directly at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
Revised:  He says that, for the time of existence of the landfill , there were 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying around the airport and extra 21 instances at the airfield during takeoff-landing operations.
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Original:  It has been reported that, for a long time, airport administration and groups of local citizens concerned with the landfill have been appealing to different Moscow Oblast and Russian Federation authorities to address the problem, but it turned out that almost nothing could be done to stop functioning of the landfill due to obscure obstacles in local governing and commerical systems.
Revised:  It has been reported that, for a long time, airport administration and groups of local citizens concerned with the landfill have been appealing to different Moscow Oblast and Russian Federation authorities to address the problem, but almost nothing has been done to close the landfill due to obscure obstacles in local governing and commerical systems.
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Original:  It has been reported that, for a long time, airport administration and groups of local citizens concerned with the landfill have been appealing to different Moscow Oblast and Russian Federation authorities to address the problem, but it turned out that almost nothing could be done to stop functioning of the landfill due to obscure obstacles in local governing and commerical systems.
Revised:  It has been reported that, for a long time, airport administration and groups of local citizens concerned with the landfill have been appealing to different Moscow Oblast and Russian Federation authorities to address the problem, but it turned out that almost nothing could be done to stop functioning of the landfill due to obstacles in local governing and commerical systems.
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Original:  It is emphasized that the existence of that landfill site is not officially permitted, and as such  the landfill is operating illegally and apparently it deals with income of money from garbage transporting services from the owners of the land, attached to Solnechnogorsky District, who allegedly utilize corruption schemes, which practice is common in Russia .
Revised:  It has been emphasized that the existence of that landfill site is not officially permitted, and as such the landfill is operating illegally and apparently it deals with income of money from garbage transporting services from the owners of the land, attached to Solnechnogorsky District, who allegedly utilize corruption schemes, which practice is common in Russia .
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Original:  It is emphasized that the existence of that landfill site is not officially permitted, and as such  the landfill is operating illegally and apparently it deals with income of money from garbage transporting services from the owners of the land, attached to Solnechnogorsky District, who allegedly utilize corruption schemes, which practice is common in Russia .
Revised:  It is emphasized that the existence of the landfill in question is not officially permitted, and as such the landfill is operating illegally and apparently it deals with income of money from garbage transporting services from the owners of the land, attached to Solnechnogorsky District, who allegedly utilize corruption schemes, which practice is common in Russia .
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Original:  It is emphasized that the existence of that landfill site is not officially permitted, and as such  the landfill is operating illegally and apparently it deals with income of money from garbage transporting services from the owners of the land, attached to Solnechnogorsky District, who allegedly utilize corruption schemes, which practice is common in Russia .
Revised:  It is emphasized that the existence of that landfill site is not officially permitted, and as such , the landfill is operating illegally and apparently it deals with income of money from garbage transporting services from the owners of the land, attached to Solnechnogorsky District, who allegedly utilize corruption schemes, which practice is common in Russia .
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Original:  It is emphasized that the existence of that landfill site is not officially permitted, and as such  the landfill is operating illegally and apparently it deals with income of money from garbage transporting services from the owners of the land, attached to Solnechnogorsky District, who allegedly utilize corruption schemes, which practice is common in Russia .
Revised:  It is emphasized that the existence of that landfill site is not officially permitted, and as such the landfill is operating illegally .
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Original:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo - historically the state's main civil airport - to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
Revised:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo — historically the state's main civil airport - to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
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Original:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo - historically the state's main civil airport - to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
Revised:  As reported by Navalny, the only thing state authorities could recently accomplish, was a temporary suspension of trash transportation during May 7–12, when many world leaders came to Moscow through Sheremetyevo - historically the state's main civil airport — to celebrate Russia's 65th Victory Day.
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Original: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that numerous planes operating near a major Russian airport,
Revised: Moscow Sheremetyevo 2 International Airport airfield It has been unveiled that aircraft operating at or near a major Russian airport,
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Original:  the Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport, have for about four years been at the risk of birdstrikes because of a high number of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site, illegal under Russian law . Prominent Russian social activist Alexey Navalny, whose anti-corruption campaigns are nowadays largely discussed in Russian Internet and general press, on Friday published a LiveJournal post with the details on the case.
Revised:  the Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport, have for about four years been at high risk of bird strikes because of a high number of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site, illegal under Russian law . Prominent Russian social activist Alexey Navalny, whose anti-corruption campaigns are nowadays largely discussed in Russian Internet and general press, on Friday published a LiveJournal post with the details on the case.
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Original:  the Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport, have for about four years been at the risk of birdstrikes because of a high number of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site, illegal under Russian law . Prominent Russian social activist Alexey Navalny, whose anti-corruption campaigns are nowadays largely discussed in Russian Internet and general press, on Friday published a LiveJournal post with the details on the case.
Revised:  the Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport, have for about four years been at the risk of birdstrikes because of a high number of birds nesting nearby on a large , illegal landfill site . Prominent Russian social activist Alexey Navalny, whose anti-corruption campaigns are nowadays largely discussed in Russian Internet and general press, on Friday published a LiveJournal post with the details on the case.
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Original:  the Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport, have for about four years been at the risk of birdstrikes because of a high number of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site, illegal under Russian law . Prominent Russian social activist Alexey Navalny, whose anti-corruption campaigns are nowadays largely discussed in Russian Internet and general press, on Friday published a LiveJournal post with the details on the case.
Revised:  the Moscow Sheremetyevo International Airport, have for about four years been at the risk of birdstrikes because of a high number of birds nesting nearby on a large garbage landfill site, illegal under Russian law . Prominent Russian social activist Alexey Navalny, whose anti-corruption campaigns are nowadays largely discussed on the Internet in Russia and general press, on Friday published a LiveJournal post with the details on the case.
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Original:  He says that, for as long as the landfill has been in existence, there have been 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying near the airport and 21 instances at the airfield during takeoff and landing operations.
Revised:  He says that, since the landfill came into existence, there have been 141 instances of planes hitting birds while flying near the airport and 21 instances at the airfield during takeoff and landing operations.
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Original:  Birdstrikes are a common problem in aviation that can lead to equipment damage and human casualties.
Revised:  Bird strikes are a common problem in aviation that can lead to equipment damage and human casualties.
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Original:  That was made possible only with the interference of , the state service which protects top Russian officials  
Revised:  That was made possible only with the interference of , the state service which protects top Russian officials . 
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Original: 200px|Saramago in 2006.
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Original:  Two people, believed to be the pilots, are dead    
Revised:  Two people, believed to be the pilots, are dead . 
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Original:  The crash at  7:43p.m. local time was during night training over . personnel reached the wreckage in the Laman/ forest at 9:00p.m.
Revised:  The crash at around 7:43p.m. local time was during night training over . personnel reached the wreckage in the Laman/ forest at 9:00p.m.
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Original:  The crash at around 7:43p.m. local time was during night training over . personnel reached the wreckage in the Laman/ forest at  9:00p.m.
Revised:  The crash at around 7:43p.m. local time was during night training over . personnel reached the wreckage in the Laman/ forest at around 9:00p.m.
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Original:  The army says their weightis too high and their engines too underpowered for some roles.
Revised:  The army says their weight is too high and their engines too underpowered for some roles.
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Original: Manufactured by in India,  140 Dhruvs are in service nationally.
Revised: Manufactured by in India, more than 140 Dhruvs are in service nationally.
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Original:  Motion also applauded Hill's success, saying that Oxford was "lucky to have him."
Revised:  Motion applauded Hill's success, saying that Oxford was "lucky to have him."
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Original:  However, Horovitz said that Hill would "probably give great lectures but they won't be anything different", and suggested that Hill, "like his poetry, won't be that accessible."
Revised:  Horovitz said that Hill would "probably give great lectures but they won't be anything different", and suggested that Hill, "like his poetry, won't be that accessible."
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Original:  However, this year's election was not without incident either.
Revised:  This year's election was not without incident either.
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Original:  Hill, who won by a large majority, is the 44th man to hold the post, but the first one to have been elected by an email-based voting system.
Revised:  Hill, who won by a large majority, is the 44th person to hold the post, but the first one to have been elected by an email-based voting system.
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Original:  Hill, who won by a large majority, is the 44th person to hold the post, but the first one to have been elected by an email-based voting system.
Revised:  Hill, who won by a large majority, is the 44th man to hold the post, but the first one to have been elected by an email-based voting system.
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Original:  According to the San Bernadino Police Department, a 56-year-old man arrived at the Del Taco at 1:15pm PST (8:15pm UTC) on a bicycle, and, armed with two semi-automatic guns, entered the restaurant and opened fire on a family of four who were dining together.
Revised:  According to the San Bernadino Police Department, 56-year-old man arrived at the Del Taco at 1:15pm PST (8:15pm UTC) on a bicycle, and, armed with two semi-automatic guns, entered the restaurant and opened fire on a family of four who were dining together.
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Original:  The father of the family  was declared dead at the scene,  the San Bernadino Fire Department said .
Revised:  The father of the family was declared dead at the scene, said the San Bernadino Fire Department said .
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Original:  The father of the family  was declared dead at the scene,  the San Bernadino Fire Department said .
Revised:  The father of the family was declared dead at the scene, the San Bernadino Fire Department .
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Original: 150px|left Leongatha got some meassure of revenge againts Wonthaggi defeating them by 95 points in their round ten Gippslaand Football League clash at the Leongatha Recreation Reserve.
Revised: 150px|left Leongatha got some meassure of revenge againts Wonthaggi defeating them by 95 points in their round ten Gippsland Football League clash at the Leongatha Recreation Reserve.
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Original:  The Gippsland Football League is the only major Australian rules football competition in the Gippsland region according to the Victorian Country Football League.
Revised:  The Gippsland Football League is the only major competition in the Gippsland region according to the Victorian Country Football League.
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Original:  The Gippsland Football League is the only major Australian rules football competition in the Gippsland region according to the Victorian Country Football League.
Revised:  The Gippsland Football League is the only major Australian rules football competition in the Gippsland region according to the Country Football League.
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Original:  At the same meeting, Wonthaggi joined the GL after dominating the Alberton Football League during the past decade.
Revised:  At the same meeting, Wonthaggi joined the GL after dominating the Football League during the past decade.
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Original:  The Power made five consecutive Alberton Grand Finals winning three, losing only to Yarram (2007) and Stony Creek (2009).
Revised:  The Power made five consecutive Alberton Grand Finals winning three, losing only to (2007) and Stony Creek (2009).
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Original:  The Power made five consecutive Alberton Grand Finals winning three, losing only to Yarram (2007) and Stony Creek (2009).
Revised:  The Power made five consecutive Alberton Grand Finals winning three, losing only to Yarram (2007) and (2009).
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Original:  In February, the Gippsland Football League announced that Wonthaggi would be changing their uniforms, because their original one was similar to that of Warragul .
Revised:  In February, the Gippsland Football League announced that Wonthaggi would be changing their uniforms, because their original one was similar to that of .
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Original:  "They shouldn ’ t have to apply for residency," said Santiago Canton of the in a interview.
Revised:  "They shouldn ' t have to apply for residency," said Santiago Canton of the in a interview.
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Original: Aged around 23, Tuile made his living shining shoes and taking commissions from money lending in the area he was murdered.
Revised: Aged around 23, Tulile made his living shining shoes and taking commissions from money lending in the area he was murdered.
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Original:  The scene is close to the University Hospital Jose Maria Cabral y Báe, around which Tuile worked.
Revised:  The scene is close to the University Hospital Jose Maria Cabral y Báe, around which Tulile worked.
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Original:  "They are Dominicans." Canton said the murder should be viewed "in the context of constant discrimination and violence against Haitians .
Revised:  "They are Dominicans." Canton said the murder should be viewed "in the context of constant discrimination and violence against Haitians "
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Original:  He was replaced by former Facebook Chief Revenue Officer w: Owen Van Natta, but Natta held on to that position for just nine months.
Revised:  He was replaced by former Facebook Chief Revenue Officer Owen Van Natta, but Natta held on to that position for just nine months.
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Original:  MySpace's reduced traffic and the departure of another executive has led industry insiders to draw comparisons between the two sites.
Revised:  MySpace's reduced traffic and the departure of another executive have led industry insiders to draw comparisons between the two sites.
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Original:  In February 2010, Hirschhorn was promoted from his position as Chief Product Officer along with Chief Operating Officer Michael Jones to the position of Co-President .
Revised:  In February 2010, Hirschhorn was promoted from his position as Chief Product Officer along with Chief Operating Officer Michael Jones to the position of co-president .
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Original:  When Victoria assumes the throne and becomes Queen, Daniel will not become King, but assume a supportive role, similar to that of Prince Phillip, the husband of the United Kingdom's Queen Elizabeth II  
Revised:  When Victoria assumes the throne and becomes Queen, Daniel will not become King, but assume a supportive role, similar to that of Prince Phillip, the husband of the United Kingdom's Queen Elizabeth II . 
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Original:  The ceremony took place at Stockholm Cathedral at 15:30 CEST (17:30 UTC) . Nearly 1, 100 guests, including many rulers, politicians, royals and other dignitaries from across the world  attended the wedding, which cost an estimated 20 million Swedish kronor.
Revised:  The ceremony took place at Stockholm Cathedral . Nearly 1, 100 guests, including many rulers, politicians, royals and other dignitaries from across the world attended the wedding, which cost an estimated 20 million Swedish kronor.
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Original:  The ceremony took place at Stockholm Cathedral at 15:30 CEST (17:30 UTC) . Nearly 1, 100 guests, including many rulers, politicians, royals and other dignitaries from across the world  attended the wedding, which cost an estimated 20 million Swedish kronor.
Revised:  The ceremony took place at Stockholm Cathedral at 15:30 CEST (17:30 UTC) . Over 1, 100 guests, including many rulers, politicians, royals and other dignitaries from across the world attended the wedding, which cost an estimated 20 million Swedish kronor.
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Original:  The ceremony took place at Stockholm Cathedral at 15:30 CEST (17:30 UTC) . Nearly 1, 100 guests, including many rulers, politicians, royals and other dignitaries from across the world  attended the wedding, which cost an estimated 20 million Swedish kronor.
Revised:  The ceremony took place at Stockholm Cathedral at 15:30 CEST (17:30 UTC) . Nearly 1, 100 guests, including many rulers, politicians, royals and other dignitaries from across the world , attended the wedding, which cost an estimated 20 million Swedish kronor.
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Original:  Victoria wore a ivory silk wedding dress with five-metre long train designed by Pär Engsheden.
Revised:  Victoria wore a wedding dress with five-metre long train designed by Pär Engsheden.
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Original:  She wore the same lace veil and Kamédiadem crown that her mother, Queen Silvia, wore on her wedding day 34 years previously, also on 19 July.
Revised:  She wore the same crown that her mother, Queen Silvia, wore on her wedding day 34 years previously, also on 19 July.
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Original:  The couple both had tears in their eyes as said their vows, and apart from fumbling when they exchanged rings, the ceremony , officiated by archbishop Anders Wejryd, went smoothly.
Revised:  The couple both had tears in their eyes as said their vows, and apart from fumbling when they exchanged rings, the ceremony went smoothly.
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Original:  They then boarded the Vasaorden, the same royal barge Victoria's parents used in their wedding, and drove through Stockholm's waters flanked by 22 warships and a flyover of 18 fighter jets . Upon reaching the Royal Palace, the couple were greeted by cheers and a choir, before King Carl Gustav gave the traditional fourfold cheers .
Revised:  They then boarded the Vasaorden, the same royal barge Victoria's parents used in their wedding, and traveled through Stockholm's waters flanked by 22 warships and a flyover of 18 fighter jets . Upon reaching the Royal Palace, the couple were greeted by cheers and a choir, before King Carl Gustav gave the traditional fourfold cheers .
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