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Original: The new treatment, which serves as a guideline worldwide, consists in using the drug gemcitabine as a radiosensibilizing agent to potentiate the effects of a regime of cisplatin chemotherapy and radiotherapy, explained Alfonso Dueñas González, who led the study.
Revised: The new treatment, which serves as a guideline worldwide, involves using the drug gemcitabine as a radiosensibilizing agent to potentiate the effects of a regime of cisplatin chemotherapy and radiotherapy, explained Alfonso Dueñas González, who led the study.
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Original:  Mr Allingham, the only surviving founding members of the RAF and one of only five surviving World War I veterans  was born on June 6, 1896 in Clapton, London.
Revised:  Mr Allingham, the only surviving founding members of the RAF and one of only five living World War I veterans was born on June 6, 1896 in Clapton, London.
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Original:  Mr Allingham, the only surviving founding members of the RAF and one of only five surviving World War I veterans  was born on June 6, 1896 in Clapton, London.
Revised:  Mr Allingham, the only surviving founding members of the RAF and one of only five surviving World War I veterans , was born on June 6, 1896 in Clapton, London.
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Original:  Mr Allingham, the only surviving founding members of the RAF and one of only five living World War I veterans, was born on June 6, 1896 in Clapton, London.
Revised:  Mr Allingham, the only surviving founding member of the RAF and one of only five living World War I veterans, was born on June 6, 1896 in Clapton, London.
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Original:  Along with being the sole  survivor of the Battle of Jutland, an honorary member of the Royal Naval Association, a recipient of the Legion d'Honneur and a doctorate in engineering from Southampton Solent University, an honorary freeman of Brighton and Hove and the "oldest scout", Mr Allingham has also published his life story
Revised:  Along with being the sole living survivor of the Battle of Jutland, an honorary member of the Royal Naval Association, a recipient of the Legion d'Honneur and a doctorate in engineering from Southampton Solent University, an honorary freeman of Brighton and Hove and the "oldest scout", Mr Allingham has also published his life story
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Original:  Ownership of the plane is unclear, with Tempo Interactive saying that reports indicated Thailand's Phuket Air owns the plane and the Jakarta Globe quoting GMF corporate secreatary Dwi Prasmono Adji as saying the plane belonged to Global Air Services.
Revised:  Ownership of the plane is unclear, with Tempo Interactive saying that reports indicated Thailand's Phuket Air owns the plane and the Jakarta Globe quoting GMF corporate secretary Dwi Prasmono Adji as saying the plane belonged to Global Air Services.
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Original:  "The airline has gone bankrupt and the plane was being taken apart so they can resell the pieces," and the fire ocured as several technicians cut the plane up, he said.
Revised:  "The airline has gone bankrupt and the plane was being taken apart so they can resell the pieces," and the fire occurred as several technicians cut the plane up, he said.
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Original:  Singayuda also said the accident occured outside a hanger and prevented injuries.
Revised:  Singayuda also said the accident occurred outside a hanger and prevented injuries.
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Original: Any expenses claims made over the past year will be investigated to see whether they constitute offences.
Revised: Any expenses claims made will be investigated to see whether they constitute offences.
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Original: The requirement  that the claim be dishonest for it to be fraud by false representation, means that any MPs' expense claims that correctly and honestly described what expenses were being claimed, or that were incorrect but not known by the MP to be incorrect when they were made, will not qualify as fraud according to law.
Revised: The requirement , that the claim be dishonest for it to be fraud by false representation, means that any MPs' expense claims that correctly and honestly described what expenses were being claimed, or that were incorrect but not known by the MP to be incorrect when they were made, will not qualify as fraud according to law.
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Original: The House of Commons Big Ben, London According to the BBC, the Metropolitan Police Service of London in the United Kingdom announced today that its Specialist Crime Directorate will start an investigation into members of the U.K. Parliament who have been implicated in the on-going scandal about MPs' expense claims.
Revised:  Big Ben, London According to the BBC, the Metropolitan Police Service of London in the United Kingdom announced today that its Specialist Crime Directorate will start an investigation into members of the U.K. Parliament who have been implicated in the on-going scandal about MPs' expense claims.
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Original: The House of Commons Big Ben, London According to the BBC, the Metropolitan Police Service of London in the United Kingdom announced today that its Specialist Crime Directorate will start an investigation into members of the U.K. Parliament who have been implicated in the on-going scandal about MPs' expense claims.
Revised: The House of Commons According to the BBC, the Metropolitan Police Service of London in the United Kingdom announced today that its Specialist Crime Directorate will start an investigation into members of the U.K. Parliament who have been implicated in the on-going scandal about MPs' expense claims.
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Original: According to the BBC, the Metropolitan Police Service of London in the United Kingdom announced today that its Specialist Crime Directorate will start an investigation into members of the U.K. Parliament  who have been implicated in the on-going scandal about MPs' expense claims.
Revised: According to the BBC, the Metropolitan Police Service of London in the United Kingdom announced today that its Specialist Crime Directorate will start an investigation into members of the U.K. Parliament , or MPs, who have been implicated in the on-going scandal about MPs' expense claims.
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Original:  According to CNN, around 300 people were queuing outside Apple's New York store while employee's were briefed inside.
Revised:  According to CNN, around 300 people were queuing outside Apple's New York store while employees were briefed inside.
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Original:  The new iPhone contains a faster processor, a digital compass and a video camera.
Revised: Lines, however, were not as long as was anticipated, with surplus metal barriers outside stores. An Apple employee was quoted as saying that the lines were shorter than this time last year. The new iPhone contains a faster processor, a digital compass and a video camera.
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Original: Lines , however, were not as long as was anticipated, with surplus metal barriers outside stores.
Revised: Lines however, were not as long as was anticipated, with surplus metal barriers outside stores.
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Original: Peaches is the second daughter of rock musician and television presenter .
Revised: Peaches is the second daughter of and television presenter .
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Original:  The writer and television presenter was found dead today in her home in in . Kent Police have said that her death is " being treated as unexplained and sudden".
Revised:  The writer and television presenter was found dead today in her home in in . Kent Police said they are treating her death as " being treated as unexplained and sudden".
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Original:  The writer and television presenter was found dead today in her home in in . Kent Police have said that her death is " being treated as unexplained and sudden".
Revised:  The writer and television presenter was found dead today in her home in in . Kent Police have said that her death is " unexplained and sudden".
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Original:  As a teenager, Geldof wrote for magazines and newspapers including , the and , as well as presenting "OMG! with Peaches Geldof" on . At the time of her death, she was in her second marriage, to musician Thomas Cohen.
Revised:  Starting as a teenager, Geldof wrote for magazines and newspapers including , the and , as well as presenting "OMG! with Peaches Geldof" on . At the time of her death, she was in her second marriage, to musician Thomas Cohen.
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Original:  The writer and television presenter  was found dead today in her home near in  . Kent Police said they are treating her death as "unexplained and sudden".
Revised:  Writer and television presenter was found dead today in her home near in . Kent Police said they are treating her death as "unexplained and sudden".
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Original:  Peaches is the second daughter of and television presenter . Starting as a teenager, Geldof wrote for magazines and newspapers including , the and , as well as presenting " OMG! with Peaches Geldof " on . At the time of her death, she was in her second marriage, to musician Thomas Cohen.
Revised:  Peaches is the second daughter of and television presenter . Starting as a teenager, Geldof wrote for magazines and newspapers including , the and , as well as presenting OMG! with Peaches Geldof " on . At the time of her death, she was in her second marriage, to musician Thomas Cohen.
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Original:  Peaches is the second daughter of and television presenter . Starting as a teenager, Geldof wrote for magazines and newspapers including , the and , as well as presenting " OMG! with Peaches Geldof " on . At the time of her death, she was in her second marriage, to musician Thomas Cohen.
Revised:  Peaches is the second daughter of and television presenter . Starting as a teenager, Geldof wrote for magazines and newspapers including , the and , as well as presenting " OMG! with Peaches Geldof on . At the time of her death, she was in her second marriage, to musician Thomas Cohen.
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Original:  Bob Geldof said in response to the news: "We are beyond pain.
Revised:  Bob Geldof said "We are beyond pain.
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Original:  Her husband Thomas Cohen also paid tribute: "My beloved wife Peaches was adored by myself and her two sons Astala and Phaedra and I shall bring them up with their mother in their hearts everyday.
Revised:  Thomas Cohen also paid tribute: "My beloved wife Peaches was adored by myself and her two sons Astala and Phaedra and I shall bring them up with their mother in their hearts everyday.
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Original:  The formal announcement came after he had played the second of his warm-up exhibition matches, against Stanislas Wawrinka   
Revised:  The formal announcement came after he had played the second of his warm-up matches. 
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Original: On Thursday, whilst playing Lleyton Hewitt, Nadal had  issues with moving about the court.
Revised: On Thursday, whilst playing Lleyton Hewitt, Nadal had had issues with moving about the court.
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Original:  Bjorn Borg was quoted  as saying "Nadal is always a dangerous player because he is the best in the world - but what happened in Paris and then the injury, I am picking Andy Murray or Roger Federer ," said the Swede.
Revised:  Bjorn Borg was quoted as saying "Nadal is always a dangerous player because he is the best in the world — but what happened in Paris and then the injury, I am picking Andy Murray or Roger Federer ," said the Swede.
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Original:  Bjorn Borg was quoted  as saying "Nadal is always a dangerous player because he is the best in the world - but what happened in Paris and then the injury, I am picking Andy Murray or Roger Federer ," said the Swede.
Revised:  Bjorn Borg was quoted as saying "Nadal is always a dangerous player because he is the best in the world - but what happened in Paris and then the injury, I am picking Andy Murray or Roger Federer .
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Original:   For Nadal to win five in a row (at the French Open) was a big goal this year.
Revised:  … For Nadal to win five in a row (at the French Open) was a big goal this year.
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Original: As a consequence of Nadal's withdrawal, Roger Federer was promoted to number 1 seed, which in turn caused Andy Murray to be promoted to number 2 seed.
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Original:  He will be the first champion to not defend his Wimbledon championship since Goran Ivanisevic pulled out in 2002.
Revised:  He will be the first champion to not defend his Wimbledon championship since Goran Ivanišević pulled out in 2002.
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Original: On Thursday, whilst playing Lleyton Hewitt, Nadal had had issues with moving about the court.
Revised: On Thursday, whilst playing Lleyton Hewitt, Nadal had experienced issues with moving about the court.
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Original:  Proxy servers can also be used to attack websites  
Revised:  Proxy servers can also be used to attack websites . 
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Original: Wikinews discovered that an individual or group has claimed responsibility for attacking the website on an Iranian internet forum.
Revised: After investigating, it was discovered that an individual or group has claimed responsibility for attacking the website on an Iranian internet forum.
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Original:  Wikinews has also discovered that citizens have set up internet channels on IRC in an attempt to create proxy servers and addresses to bypass the the blocking of the internet by the Iranian government.
Revised:  It was also discovered that citizens have set up internet channels on IRC in an attempt to create proxy servers and addresses to bypass the the blocking of the internet by the Iranian government.
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Original: Wikinews has learned that the Islamic Republic of Iran Broadcasting (IRIB) website has been hacked and is suffering from an alleged denial-of-service attack (DDoS).
Revised: Wikinews has learned that the Islamic Republic of Iran Broadcasting (IRIB) website has been hacked and is suffering from an apparent Distributed denial-of-service attack (DDoS).
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Original:  After investigating , it was discovered that an individual or group has claimed responsibility for attacking the website on an Iranian internet forum.
Revised:  On further investigation , it was discovered that an individual or group has claimed responsibility for attacking the website on an Iranian internet forum.
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Original:  After investigating , it was discovered that an individual or group has claimed responsibility for attacking the website on an Iranian internet forum.
Revised:  After investigating , it was discovered that an individual or group claims responsibility for attacking the website on an Iranian internet forum.
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Original:  It was also discovered that citizens have set up internet channels on IRC in an attempt to create proxy servers and addresses to bypass the the blocking of the internet by the Iranian government.
Revised:  It was also discovered that citizens have set up internet channels on IRC in an attempt to disseminate proxy servers and addresses to bypass the the blocking of the internet by the Iranian government.
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Original:  The Iranian government has blocked access to the internet , or access to websites, in nearly all of Iran.
Revised:  The Iranian government has blocked access to the Internet , or access to websites, in nearly all of Iran.
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Original:  Wikinews has obtained a partial list of those websites which include Facebook, BBC and several Iranian based websites
Revised:  A partial list of those websites which include Facebook, BBC and several Iranian based websites
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Original:  Wikinews has obtained a partial list of those websites which include Facebook, BBC and several Iranian based websites
Revised:  Wikinews has obtained a partial list of blocked websites includes Facebook, BBC and several Iranian based websites
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Original:  He stated that the elections had been fairly run, urged the opposition to stop the protests by demonstrators, and accused foreign countries, singling out the United Kingdom in particular, of interference in internal Iranian affairs    
Revised:  He stated that the elections had been fairly run, urged the opposition to stop the protests by demonstrators, and accused foreign countries, singling out the United Kingdom in particular, of interference in internal Iranian affairs . 
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Original: Category:Politics and conflictsCategory:United KingdomCategory:IranCategory:United StatesCategory:Israel the minarets of the mosque at the University of Tehran At Friday prayers today at the mosque of Tehran University, Supreme Leader of Iran Ali Khamenei spoke about the disturbances in Iran that have followed its recent presidential election.
Revised:  At Friday prayers today at the mosque of Tehran University, Supreme Leader of Iran Ali Khamenei spoke about the disturbances in Iran that have followed its recent presidential election.
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Original:  Ali Khamenei issued a veiled warning to opposition leaders, including Mir Hossein Mousavi ( who was not actually present in the prayer hall where Ali Khamenei was speaking ) , that street demonstrations were unaceptable, and challenges to democracy.
Revised:  Ali Khamenei issued a veiled warning to opposition leaders, including Mir Hossein Mousavi , who was not actually present in the prayer hall where Ali Khamenei was speaking ) , that street demonstrations were unaceptable, and challenges to democracy.
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Original:  Ali Khamenei issued a veiled warning to opposition leaders, including Mir Hossein Mousavi ( who was not actually present in the prayer hall where Ali Khamenei was speaking ) , that street demonstrations were unaceptable, and challenges to democracy.
Revised:  Ali Khamenei issued a veiled warning to opposition leaders, including Mir Hossein Mousavi ( who was not present in the prayer hall where Ali Khamenei was speaking ) , that street demonstrations were unaceptable, and challenges to democracy.
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Original:  Ali Khamenei issued a veiled warning to opposition leaders, including Mir Hossein Mousavi ( who was not actually present in the prayer hall where Ali Khamenei was speaking ) , that street demonstrations were unaceptable, and challenges to democracy.
Revised:  Ali Khamenei issued a veiled warning to opposition leaders, including Mir Hossein Mousavi ( who was not actually present in the prayer hall where Ali Khamenei was speaking , that street demonstrations were unaceptable, and challenges to democracy.
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Original:  Ali Khamenei issued a veiled warning to opposition leaders, including Mir Hossein Mousavi ( who was not actually present in the prayer hall where Ali Khamenei was speaking ) , that street demonstrations were unaceptable, and challenges to democracy.
Revised:  Ali Khamenei issued a veiled warning to opposition leaders, including Mir Hossein Mousavi ( who was not actually present in the prayer hall where Ali Khamenei was speaking ) , that street demonstrations were unacceptable and challenges to democracy.
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Original:  He stated that such street demonstration must stop, and that if it did not  people would be held accountable.
Revised:  He stated that such street demonstration must stop, and that if it did not , people would be held accountable.
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Original:  He also accused the United States of hypocrisy, commenting on the contrast between U.S. President Barack Obama's letter offering better relations between the U.S. and Iran with his comments on the Iranian presidential election, and pointing to the U.S. military 's actions in Afghanistan and Iraq, saying "We do not need any advice on human rights from them.".
Revised:  He also accused the United States of hypocrisy, commenting on the contrast between U.S. President Barack Obama's letter offering better relations between the U.S. and Iran with his comments on the Iranian presidential election, and pointing to the U.S. military actions in Afghanistan and Iraq, saying "We do not need any advice on human rights from them.".
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Original:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by United States Secretary of State Hilary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on  Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed . Related new
Revised:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by US Secretary of State Hilary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed . Related new
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Original:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by United States Secretary of State Hilary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on  Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed . Related new
Revised:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by United States Secretary of State Hillary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed . Related new
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Original:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by United States Secretary of State Hilary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on  Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed . Related new
Revised:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by United States Secretary of State Hilary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on the Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed . Related new
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Original:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by United States Secretary of State Hilary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on  Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed . Related new
Revised:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by United States Secretary of State Hilary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed Related new
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Original:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by United States Secretary of State Hilary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on  Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed . Related new
Revised:  He similarly contrasted, albeit without explicitly naming their source, remarks made by United States Secretary of State Hilary Clinton about human rights in Iran with the events of the FBI raid on Branch Davidian cult's headquarters in Waco, Texas in 1993, where 75 people were killed . 
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Original:  He stated that such street demonstration must stop, and that if it did not, people would be held accountable.
Revised:  He stated that such street demonstrations must stop, and that if it did not, people would be held accountable.
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Revised:  Facebook's Farsi version of its WWW site, which is still marked as a beta-test version, was launched rapidly, with, the company states, the assistance of more than 400 Farsi speakers who submitted translations of the contents of the site. Related new
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