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Original:  The Washington Blade  reported on the Post  's decision to change the story and included more details about Rogers' activities and friends in the GLBT community.
Revised:  The Washington Blade reported on the Post '' 's decision to change the story and included more details about Rogers' activities and friends in the GLBT community.
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Original:  The Washington Blade  reported on the Post  's decision to change the story and included more details about Rogers' activities and friends in the GLBT community.
Revised:  The Washington Blade reported on the Post 's decision to change the story and included more details about Rogers' activities and friends in the LGBT community.
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Original:  Subsequently, Howell of the Washington Post, citing Rogers' apparent feelings on DADT, wrote a column admitting that the Post's  article “would have been richer” had it disclosed his sexual orientation and activities in the GLBT community.
Revised:  Subsequently, Howell of the Washington Post, citing Rogers' apparent feelings on DADT, wrote a column admitting that the Post's '' article “would have been richer” had it disclosed his sexual orientation and activities in the GLBT community.
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Original:  Subsequently, Howell of the Washington Post, citing Rogers' apparent feelings on DADT, wrote a column admitting that the Post's  article “would have been richer” had it disclosed his sexual orientation and activities in the GLBT community.
Revised:  Subsequently, Howell of the Washington Post, citing Rogers' apparent feelings on DADT, wrote a column admitting that the Post's article “would have been richer” had it disclosed his sexual orientation and activities in the LGBT community.
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Original:  Rogers was buried with full military honors at Arlington National Cemetery on March 14, 2008, in Section 50, at Gravesite 8558.
Revised:  Rogers was buried with full military honors at Arlington National Cemetery on March 14, 2008, in Section 50, at Gravesite 
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Original: Initially, members of the national media were well aware of Rogers' w: sexual orientation, yet it was widely reported that Rogers was not married and left no children.
Revised: Initially, members of the national media were well aware of Rogers' sexual orientation, yet it was widely reported that Rogers was not married and left no children.
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Original: The January occasion of the 4,000th U.S. military member to die in the Iraq War brought renewed focus on the military's "Don't ask, Don't tell" (DADT) policy towards LGBT service members, according to the w:Washington Post | and other media sources.
Revised: The January occasion of the 4,000th U.S. military member to die in the Iraq War brought renewed focus on the military's "Don't ask, Don't tell" (DADT) policy towards LGBT service members, according to the Washington Post and other media sources.
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Original:  Rogers was buried with full military honors at Arlington National Cemetery on March 14, 2008 , in Section 50, at Gravesite 8558
Revised:  Rogers was buried with full military honors at Arlington National Cemetery on March 14, 2008 
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Original: The January occasion of the  4,000th U.S. military member to die in the Iraq War brought renewed focus on the military's "Don't ask, Don 't tell" (DADT) policy towards LGBT service members, according to the Washington Post and other media sources.
Revised: The January occasion of the death of the 4,000th U.S. military member to die in the Iraq War brought renewed focus on the military's "Don't ask, Don 't tell" (DADT) policy towards LGBT service members, according to the Washington Post and other media sources.
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Original: The January occasion of the  4,000th U.S. military member to die in the Iraq War brought renewed focus on the military's "Don't ask, Don 't tell" (DADT) policy towards LGBT service members, according to the Washington Post and other media sources.
Revised: The January occasion of the 4,000th member of the United States military in the Iraq War brought renewed focus on the military's "Don't ask, Don 't tell" (DADT) policy towards LGBT service members, according to the Washington Post and other media sources.
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Original: The January occasion of the  4,000th U.S. military member to die in the Iraq War brought renewed focus on the military's "Don't ask, Don 't tell" (DADT) policy towards LGBT service members, according to the Washington Post and other media sources.
Revised: The January occasion of the 4,000th U.S. military member to die in the Iraq War brought renewed focus on the military's "Don't ask, don 't tell" (DADT) policy towards LGBT service members, according to the Washington Post and other media sources.
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Original:  Rogers' funeral gained national media publicity, initially on MSNBC, in the Washington Post and on National Public Radio's  Morning Edition;
Revised:  Rogers' funeral gained national media publicity, initially on MSNBC, in the Washington Post and on National Public Radio's (NPR) Morning Edition;
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Original:  The Post and NPR reports coincided with the “grim milestone” that the US military death toll reached 4,000 dead.
Revised:  The Post and NPR reports coincided with the "grim milestone" that the US military death toll reached 4,000 dead.
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Original:  Initially, members of the national media were well aware of Rogers' sexual orientation, yet it was widely reported that Rogers was not married and left no children.
Revised:  Initially, members of the national media were well aware of Rogers' sexual orientation, and it was widely reported that Rogers was not married and left no children.
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Original:  While technically accurate, the statement was viewed as an intentional distortion and dodge of Rogers' sexual orientation by some members of the LGBT community.
Revised:  While technically accurate, the omission of Rogers' sexual orientation was viewed as an intentional distortion and dodge of Rogers' sexual orientation by some members of the LGBT community.
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Original:  While technically accurate, the statement was viewed as an intentional distortion and dodge of Rogers' sexual orientation by some members of the LGBT community.
Revised:  While technically accurate, the statement was viewed as an intentional distortion by some members of the LGBT community.
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Original:  The Washington Post Ombudsman , Deborah Howell, wrote that the editors of the Post deliberated the question of whether to disclose his sexual orientation and ultimately made a decision not to include such information.
Revised:  The Washington Post ombudsman , Deborah Howell, wrote that the editors of the Post deliberated the question of whether to disclose his sexual orientation and ultimately made a decision not to include such information.
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Original: Two foreign aid workers attached to a United Nations (U.N.) project were kidnapped in Southern Somalia on Tuesday.
Revised: Two foreign aid workers attached to a United Nations (U.N.) project were kidnapped in southern Somalia on Tuesday.
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Original:  We believe they are being held hostage , said Noleye .
Revised:  We believe they are being held hostage " .
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Original:  The men are not themselves members of the FAO, but are employees of Genesys International Corporation, a Bangalore information technology company  .
Revised:  The men are not themselves members of the FAO, but are employees of Genesys International Corporation, an information technology company .
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Original: A statement released by the the UN country office for Somalia addressed reports that one of the men kidnapped had been wounded: "Witnesses on the ground say there was gunfire when the men were taken, but there is no information to suggest that any serious injury was sustained by either man."
Revised: A statement released by the UN country office for Somalia addressed reports that one of the men kidnapped had been wounded: "Witnesses on the ground say there was gunfire when the men were taken, but there is no information to suggest that any serious injury was sustained by either man."
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Original: 170px|A Minuteman III|right At 08:01 GMT (01:01 local time) this morning,  a Minuteman III missile was launched on a test mission from Launch Facility 09 at Vandenberg Air Force Base in California.
Revised: 170px|A Minuteman III|right At 08:01 GMT (01:01 local time) this morning, a Minuteman III missile on a test mission from Launch Facility 09 at Vandenberg Air Force Base in California.
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Original: The missile flew 6,759 kilometres (4,200 miles) downrange on a Sub-orbital trajectory, to the Kwajalein Atoll test site in the Marshall Islands , the apogee reached has not yet been released, however typical Minuteman launches reach between 1,000 and 1,300km.
Revised: The missile flew 6,759 kilometres (4,200 miles) downrange on a Sub-orbital trajectory, to the Kwajalein Atoll test site in the Marshall Islands . The apogee reached has not yet been released, however typical Minuteman launches reach between 1,000 and 1,300km.
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Original:  The missile flew 6,759 kilometres (4,200 miles) downrange on a Sub-orbital trajectory, to the Kwajalein Atoll test site in the Marshall Islands.
Revised:  The missile flew 6,759 kilometres (4,200 miles) downrange on a trajectory, to the Kwajalein Atoll test site in the Marshall Islands.
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Original:  The missile flew 6,759 kilometres (4,200 miles) downrange on a Sub-orbital trajectory, to the Kwajalein Atoll test site in the Marshall Islands.
Revised:  The missile flew 6,759 kilometres (4,200 miles) downrange on a Sub-orbital trajectory, to the test site in the Marshall Islands.
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Original:  The apogee reached has not yet been released, however typical Minuteman launches reach between 1,000 and 1,300km.
Revised:  The reached has not yet been released, however typical Minuteman launches reach between 1,000 and 1,300km.
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Original: Bertie Ahern has today announces that intends to stand down from the office of Taoiseach (Irish Prime Minister) on the 6th of May.
Revised: Bertie Ahern has today announced that intends to stand down from the office of Taoiseach (Irish Prime Minister) on the 6th of May.
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Original:  He currently leads a coalition of his own party w: Fianna Fáil |Fianna Fáil , the Green Party, the Progressive Democrats and various independent politicians.
Revised:  He currently leads a coalition of his own party Fianna Fáil |Fianna Fáil , the Green Party, the Progressive Democrats and various independent politicians.
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Original:  He currently leads a coalition of his own party w: Fianna Fáil |Fianna Fáil , the Green Party, the Progressive Democrats and various independent politicians.
Revised:  He currently leads a coalition of his own party w: Fianna Fáil , the Green Party, the Progressive Democrats and various independent politicians.
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Original:  Sinn Fein leader Gerry Adams noted, "He is justifiably proud of the fact that he was the taoiseach who was in place and who, with the british prime minister and the rest of us, brought about the Good Friday agreement and he deserves are thanks for that.
Revised:  Sinn Féin leader Gerry Adams noted, "He is justifiably proud of the fact that he was the taoiseach who was in place and who, with the british prime minister and the rest of us, brought about the Good Friday agreement and he deserves are thanks for that.
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Original:  Sinn Fein leader Gerry Adams noted, "He is justifiably proud of the fact that he was the taoiseach who was in place and who, with the british prime minister and the rest of us, brought about the Good Friday agreement and he deserves are thanks for that.
Revised:  Sinn Fein leader Gerry Adams noted, "He is justifiably proud of the fact that he was the Taoiseach who was in place and who, with the british prime minister and the rest of us, brought about the Good Friday agreement and he deserves are thanks for that.
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Original:  Sinn Fein leader Gerry Adams noted, "He is justifiably proud of the fact that he was the taoiseach who was in place and who, with the british prime minister and the rest of us, brought about the Good Friday agreement and he deserves are thanks for that.
Revised:  Sinn Fein leader Gerry Adams noted, "He is justifiably proud of the fact that he was the taoiseach who was in place and who, with the British prime minister and the rest of us, brought about the Good Friday agreement and he deserves are thanks for that.
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Original:  Sinn Fein leader Gerry Adams noted, "He is justifiably proud of the fact that he was the taoiseach who was in place and who, with the british prime minister and the rest of us, brought about the Good Friday agreement and he deserves are thanks for that.
Revised:  Sinn Fein leader Gerry Adams noted, "He is justifiably proud of the fact that he was the taoiseach who was in place and who, with the british prime minister and the rest of us, brought about the Good Friday agreement and he deserves our thanks for that.
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Original:  And he deserves our gratitude for that I mean, it was a collective effort, but clearly as the taoiseach of the day he is due appreciation for that."
Revised:  And he deserves our gratitude for that I mean, it was a collective effort, but clearly as the Taoiseach of the day he is due appreciation for that."
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Original:    British Prime Minister   Gordon Brown noted, "Bertie Ahern has been an outstanding statesman, and has made an historic contribution in helping to bring peace to Northern Ireland, transforming Ireland's relationship with the UK, and playing a key role in the development of a forward looking and dynamic Europe."
Revised:  British Prime Minister said of Ahern, "He will always be remembered for his crucial role in bringing about peace in Northern Ireland, for transforming relations between Britain and the Irish Republic and for presiding over a sustained period of economic and social advance in Ireland." Blair further added, "He will have, deservedly, a central place in his nation's political history and much more widely." He said of Ahern, "A remarkable man with a remarkable record of achievement." Gordon Brown noted, "Bertie Ahern has been an outstanding statesman, and has made an historic contribution in helping to bring peace to Northern Ireland, transforming Ireland's relationship with the UK, and playing a key role in the development of a forward looking and dynamic Europe."
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Original:    British Prime Minister   Gordon Brown noted, "Bertie Ahern has been an outstanding statesman, and has made an historic contribution in helping to bring peace to Northern Ireland, transforming Ireland's relationship with the UK, and playing a key role in the development of a forward looking and dynamic Europe."
Revised:  British Prime Minister British Prime Minister Gordon Brown noted, "Bertie Ahern has been an outstanding statesman, and has made an historic contribution in helping to bring peace to Northern Ireland, transforming Ireland's relationship with the UK, and playing a key role in the development of a forward looking and dynamic Europe."
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Original:  Brown added, "The UK could not have had a better partner    .
Revised:  Brown added, "The UK could not have had a better partner ." .
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Original: Bertie Ahern has today announced that  intends to stand down from the office of Taoiseach (Irish Prime Minister) on the 6th of May.
Revised: Bertie Ahern has today announced that he intends to stand down from the office of Taoiseach (Irish Prime Minister) on the 6th of May.
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Original:  A BRT route on this section will, we believe, reduce current levels of walking and cycling and may well actually encourage people to return to their cars.  
Revised:  A BRT route on this section will, we believe, reduce current levels of walking and cycling and may well actually encourage people to return to their cars. " 
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Original:  as part of relieving bristols overall transport problems then so be it. the council done right.  
Revised:  as part of relieving bristols overall transport problems then so be it. the council done right. " 
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Original:  its application should be put to whatever use best serves the half million bristolians the council acts for and if that means turning this path into a busroute or railway or even road, this year or next;
Revised:  its application should be put to whatever use best serves the half million bristolians the council acts for and if that means turning this path into a bus route or railway or even road, this year or next;
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Original:  The designer, Matthew Dent of Bangor, North Wales, was paid £35,000 for his designs, which depict the royal shield of arms spread over the 6 lower denominations of the £1 coin, with the entire shield embossed on the £1 coin.
Revised:  The designer, Matthew Dent of Bangor, North Wales, was paid £35,000 for his designs, which depict the Shield of the Royal Arms spread over the 6 lower denominations of the £1 coin, with the entire shield embossed on the £1 coin.
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Original:  The English side remained in control for much of the first half, and Drogba came close to doubling their advantage near half-time, but was snuffed out by the Fenerbahçe keeper   
Revised:  The English side remained in control for much of the first half, and Drogba came close to doubling their advantage near half-time, but was snuffed out by the Fenerbahçe keeper . 
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Original:  The code injected by the hackers flashed two images repeatedly and tried to lead users off to external websites showing flashing lights and shapes intended to trigger off epileptic fits.
Revised:  The code injected by the vandals flashed two images repeatedly and tried to lead users off to external websites showing flashing lights and shapes intended to trigger off epileptic fits.
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Original:  The code injected by the vandals flashed two images repeatedly and tried to lead users off to external websites showing flashing lights and shapes intended to trigger off epileptic fits.
Revised:  The code injected by the hackers flashed two images repeatedly and tried to lead users off to external websites showing flashing lights and shapes intended to trigger off epileptic fits.
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Original:  Following critical reports about the attack, members of the group blamed the attack on the Church of Scientology            .
Revised:  Following critical reports about the attack, members of the group blamed the attack on the Church of Scientology I must say, it is disgusting that the CoS is willing to drag innocent people down with them, in an attempt to save themselves. How could anyone be a willing participant in their terrible organization? .
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Original:  The home page of 7chan.org issued the following statement on its homepage: ATTENTION: Newcomers from Wired, Digg, Engadget, Slashdot, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% by OverlordXenu - 3/29/08 @ 7:46PM PDT Hello, and welcome to our website.
Revised:  The home page of 7chan.org issued the following statement on its homepage: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% by OverlordXenu - 3/29/08 @ 7:46PM PDT Hello, and welcome to our website.
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Original:  The home page of 7chan.org issued the following statement on its homepage: ATTENTION: Newcomers from Wired, Digg, Engadget, Slashdot, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% by OverlordXenu - 3/29/08 @ 7:46PM PDT Hello, and welcome to our website.
Revised:  The home page of 7chan.org issued the following statement on its homepage: ATTENTION: Newcomers from Wired, Digg, Engadget, Slashdot, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hello, and welcome to our website.
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Original:  The home page of 7chan.org issued the following statement on its homepage: ATTENTION: Newcomers from Wired, Digg, Engadget, Slashdot, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% by OverlordXenu - 3/29/08 @ 7:46PM PDT Hello, and welcome to our website.
Revised:  The home page of 7chan.org issued the following statement on its homepage: ATTENTION: Newcomers from Wired, Digg, Engadget, Slashdot, etc.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% by OverlordXenu - 3/29/08 @ 7:46PM PDT 
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Original:  Sadly, none of our staff were online at the time of the thread's posting, so we were unable to take it down.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% We are truly and deeply sorry for what happened to these innocent people, Thank you for your time spent reading this apology, The Administration and Staff of 7chan.org%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Feel free to email us at the above address or address us on our IRC server, and we will be happy to address any of your concerns regarding this terrible incident .
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Administration and Staff of 7chan.org%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Feel free to email us at the above address or address us on our IRC server, and we will be happy to address any of your concerns regarding this terrible incident .
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% We are truly and deeply sorry for what happened to these innocent people, Thank you for your time spent reading this apology, The Administration and Staff of 7chan.org%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Feel free to email us at the above address or address us on our IRC server, and we will be happy to address any of your concerns regarding this terrible incident .
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% We are truly and deeply sorry for what happened to these innocent people, Thank you for your time spent reading this apology, %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Feel free to email us at the above address or address us on our IRC server, and we will be happy to address any of your concerns regarding this terrible incident .
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% We are truly and deeply sorry for what happened to these innocent people, Thank you for your time spent reading this apology, The Administration and Staff of 7chan.org%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Feel free to email us at the above address or address us on our IRC server, and we will be happy to address any of your concerns regarding this terrible incident .
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% We are truly and deeply sorry for what happened to these innocent people, Thank you for your time spent reading this apology, The Administration and Staff of 7chan.org%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% .
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Original:  One lady , RyAnne Fultz, was paralyzed by the flashing images in what she calls her worst attack in over a year, until her 11-year old son managed to get her to stop looking at the screen and close the flashing images.
Revised:  One woman , RyAnne Fultz, was paralyzed by the flashing images in what she calls her worst attack in over a year, until her 11-year old son managed to get her to stop looking at the screen and close the flashing images.
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Original:  Both teams pushed for a winner nearing the end, but it would end all square after 90 minutes  
Revised:  Both teams pushed for a winner nearing the end, but it would end all square after 90 minutes . 
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Original: Rangers 0 - 0 Sporting Lisbon Sporting Lisbon traveled to Scotland to take on the only British team remaining in the competition.
Revised: Rangers 0 - 0 Sporting Lisbon Sporting traveled to Scotland to take on the only British team remaining in the competition.
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