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Original: President Bush with India's Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh, during their meeting in the Oval Office in July 2005 The US Ambassador David Mulford has reportedly hinted that the  civil nuclear energy pact with India may face problems getting through Congress if India refused to vote against Iran at the upcoming meeting of  United Nations nuclear watchdog  .
Revised: President Bush with India's Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh, during their meeting in the Oval Office in July 2005 The US Ambassador David Mulford has reportedly hinted that the civil nuclear energy pact with India may face problems getting through Congress if India refused to vote against Iran at the upcoming meeting of the United Nations nuclear watchdog .
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Original:  The deal had been made after a  policy shift by US President George W. Bush in July of 2005 that offered cooperation in India's development of civilian atomic power industry in exchange for its support of the International Atomic Energy Agency's (IAEA) nonproliferation standards.
Revised:  The nuclear pact was made after a policy shift by US President George W. Bush in July of 2005 that offered cooperation in India's development of civilian atomic power industry in exchange for its support of the International Atomic Energy Agency's (IAEA) nonproliferation standards.
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Original:  The deal had been made after a  policy shift by US President George W. Bush in July of 2005 that offered cooperation in India's development of civilian atomic power industry in exchange for its support of the International Atomic Energy Agency's (IAEA) nonproliferation standards.
Revised:  The deal had been made after a policy shift by U.S. President George W. Bush in July of 2005 that offered cooperation in India's development of civilian atomic power industry in exchange for its support of the International Atomic Energy Agency's (IAEA) nonproliferation standards.
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Original:  The deal had been made after a  policy shift by US President George W. Bush in July of 2005 that offered cooperation in India's development of civilian atomic power industry in exchange for its support of the International Atomic Energy Agency's (IAEA) nonproliferation standards.
Revised:  The deal had been made after a policy shift by US President George W. Bush that offered cooperation in India's development of civilian atomic power industry in exchange for its support of the International Atomic Energy Agency's (IAEA) nonproliferation standards.
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Original:  The US State Department 's Sean McCormack stated at a briefing that  "The ambassador was expressing his personal opinion about what the potential political outcome might be.
Revised:  The U.S. State Department spokesman Sean McCormack stated at a briefing that "The ambassador was expressing his personal opinion about what the potential political outcome might be.
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Original:  The US State Department 's Sean McCormack stated at a briefing that  "The ambassador was expressing his personal opinion about what the potential political outcome might be.
Revised:  The US State Department 's Sean McCormack stated at a briefing that , "The ambassador was expressing his personal opinion about what the potential political outcome might be.
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Original:  He was giving his personal assessment of how the Congress might react to such an action by India  , " and stated that"
Revised:  He was giving his personal assessment of how the Congress might react to such an action by India , " 
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Original:  We certainly would encourage and hope that they  vote for referral this time around."
Revised:  We certainly would encourage and hope that they India vote for referral this time around."
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Original:  The US claims that Iran's nuclear program is aimed at developing weapons, a claim that Tehran denies.
Revised:  The U.S. claims that Iran's nuclear program is aimed at developing weapons, a claim that Tehran denies.
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Original:  India's foreign ministry rejected any attempt to tie its stance on Iran to the deal with the US on acquiring nuclear know-how.
Revised:  India's foreign ministry rejected any attempt to tie its stance on Iran to the deal with the U.S. on acquiring nuclear know-how.
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Original:  The U.S. also opposes the gas pipeline project between India and Iran for which negotiations began in 1994, which is also intended to provide India with increased energy capacities.
Revised:  The U.S. also opposes the negotiations, begun in 1994, on a proposed gas pipeline between India and Iran for which negotiations began in 1994, which is also intended to provide India with increased energy capacities.
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Original:  The U.S. also opposes the gas pipeline project between India and Iran for which negotiations began in 1994, which is also intended to provide India with increased energy capacities.
Revised:  The U.S. also opposes the gas pipeline project between India and Iran which is intended to provide India with increased energy capacities.
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Original: President Bush with India's Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh, during their meeting in the Oval Office in July 2005 The United States Ambassador to India, David Mulford, has reportedly hinted that the U.S. civil nuclear energy pact with India may face problems getting approved by Congress if India refused to vote against Iran at the upcoming meeting of the United Nations nuclear watchdog committee.
Revised: President Bush with India's Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh, during their meeting in the Oval Office in July 2005 The United SStates Ambassador to India, David Mulford, has reportedly hinted that the U.S. civil nuclear energy pact with India may face problems getting approved by Congress if India refused to vote against Iran at the upcoming meeting of the United Nations nuclear watchdog committee.
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Original:  McCormack added that, "We certainly would encourage and hope that they India vote for referral this time around."
Revised:  McCormack added that, "We certainly would encourage and hope that they (India) vote for referral this time around."
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Original: Mass-protests on economic grounds are frequent in China , although under-reported .
Revised: Mass-protests on economic grounds are frequent in China .
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Original:  An average of around 30 ,000 protests each month occurred in the first half of 2011.
Revised:  An average of around 30 ,000 protests occur each month.
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Original:  Until, that is, last week when a local official asserted the town's chosen negotiators were helping "overseas forces that want to sow divisions between the government and villagers."
Revised:  Until, that is, last week after a local official asserted the town's chosen negotiators were helping "overseas forces that want to sow divisions between the government and villagers."
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Original:  Those in the town say they are able to obtain needed supplies from neighbouring villages 
Revised:  Town residents have reportedly said that they are able to obtain needed supplies from neighbouring villages 
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Original:  Those in the town say they are able to obtain needed supplies from neighbouring villages 
Revised:  Those in the town say they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages 
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Original:  Town residents have reportedly said that they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but it has also been reported that Wukan only has enough supplies to last  ten days
Revised:  Town residents reportedly say they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but it has also been reported that Wukan only has enough supplies to last ten days
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Original:  Town residents have reportedly said that they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but it has also been reported that Wukan only has enough supplies to last  ten days
Revised:  Town residents have reportedly said that they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but some are also reported saying Wukan only has enough supplies to last ten days
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Original:  Town residents have reportedly said that they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but it has also been reported that Wukan only has enough supplies to last  ten days
Revised:  Town residents have reportedly said that they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but it has also been reported that Wukan only has enough supplies to last about ten days
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Original:  Town residents reportedly say they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but some are also reported saying Wukan only has enough supplies to last about ten days
Revised:  Some town residents reportedly say they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but some are also reported saying Wukan only has enough supplies to last about ten days
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Original:  Town residents reportedly say they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but some are also reported saying Wukan only has enough supplies to last about ten days
Revised:  Town residents reportedly say they are able to obtain supplies from neighbouring villages, but some are also reported saying Wukan only has enough supplies to last about ten days
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Original:  Town residents reportedly say they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but some are also reported saying Wukan only has enough supplies to last about ten days
Revised:  Town residents reportedly say they are able to obtain some supplies from neighbouring villages, but it has also been reported Wukan only has enough supplies to last about ten days
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Original: Victorian firefighters continue to battle blazes across rural Victoria which threaten up to 25 communities.
Revised: Firefighters in the Australian state ofVictoria continue to battle blazes across rural Victoria which threaten up to 25 communities.
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Original: Firefighters in the Australian state ofVictoria continue to battle blazes across rural Victoria which threaten up to 25 communities.
Revised: Firefighters in the Australian state of Victoria continue to battle blazes across rural Victoria which threaten up to 25 communities.
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Original: United States Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice repeated the US/EU call for Hamas to reject violence and recogonize Israel, and reminded that the US still considers Hamas a terrorist group.
Revised: United States Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice repeated the US/EU call for Hamas to reject violence and recognize Israel, and reminded that the US still considers Hamas a terrorist group.
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Original:  "This is a victory to all the region ’ s free people;
Revised:  "This is a victory to all the region ' s free people;
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Original: United States Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice repeated the US/EU call for Hamas to reject violence and recognize Israel, and reminded that the US still considers Hamas a terrorist group.
Revised: United States Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice repeated the US/EU call for Hamas to reject violence and recognize Israel, and reminded that the US still considers Hamas a terrorist group.
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Original:  Most other countries do not recognize their claim  
Revised:  Most other countries do not recognize their claim ." 
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Original:  "   The United States defends its sovereignty;
Revised:  " " The United States defends its sovereignty;
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Original:  The arctic passage is melting and commercial ships are able to cut 2,480 miles in distance off of the trip from Europe to Asia when compared to using the Panama Cana 
Revised:  The arctic passage is melting and commercial ships are able to cut 2,480 miles in distance off of the trip from Europe to Asia when compared to using the Panama Canal. 
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Original:  Several reports state that during the tour the difficulties faced by Muslims in Denmark were grossly overstated
Revised:  Several reports state that during the tour the difficulties faced by Muslims in Denmark were grossly overstate
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Original:  In mid-December 2005, a delegation from several Danish Muslim organizations went on a tour in several Midle-Eastern and Arabic countries, reportedly to gain sympathy for their point of view.
Revised:  In mid-December 2005, a delegation from several Danish Muslim organizations went on a tour in several Middle-Eastern and Arabic countries, reportedly to gain sympathy for their point of view.
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Original:  On January 26th, a massive boycott of dairy produce from Arla Foods started in Saudi Arabia in response to the Publishing of Offensive Cartoons of The Islamic Prophet by the Largest Danish Newspaper Jyllands-Posten .
Revised:  On January 26th, a massive boycott of dairy produce from Arla Foods started in Saudi Arabia over what is perceived as a Danish attack on Muslim values .
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Original:  '' Source: The Guardi
Revised:  Source: The Guardi
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Original: China unviels plans for $242B bridge to Taiwan Officials in Beijing plan to build the world's longest bridge to connect Taiwan to mainland China.
Revised: China unveils plans for $242B bridge to Taiwan Officials in Beijing plan to build the world's longest bridge to connect Taiwan to mainland China.
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Original:  Source: The Guardi 
Revised:  Source: The Guardian 
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Original: General Motors Corporation has posted it's first annual loss since 1992.
Revised: General Motors Corporation (GM) has posted its first annual loss since 1992.
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Original:  GM admitted Thursday night that the loss could swell further as its pays pensions and healthcare costs to thousands of former workers.
Revised:  GM admitted Thursday night that the loss could swell further as it pays pensions and healthcare costs to thousands of former workers.
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Original:  Ford, the second of the big three American car manufacturers  beat predictions earlier in the week.
Revised:  Ford, the second of the big three American car manufacturers , beat predictions earlier in the week.
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Original:  GMs automotive division lost $1.5 billion in the fourth quarter, driven by losses in North America.
Revised:  GM's automotive division lost $1.5 billion in the fourth quarter, driven by losses in North America.
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Original:  As part of the restructure  GM plans to cut 30,000 jobs and close 12 facilities by 2008.
Revised:  As part of the restructure , GM plans to cut 30,000 jobs and close 12 facilities by 2008.
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Original:  An aide for Kirk Kerkorian, GMs largest individual investor (at 9.9\%)  has called on the company to halve its $US1.1 billion annual dividend expense , cut executive pay and sell Saab
Revised:  An aide for Kirk Kerkorian, GMs largest individual investor (at 9.9\%) , has called on the company to halve its $US1.1 billion annual dividend expense , cut executive pay and sell Saab
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Original:  An aide for Kirk Kerkorian, GMs largest individual investor (at 9.9\%)  has called on the company to halve its $US1.1 billion annual dividend expense , cut executive pay and sell Saab
Revised:  An aide for Kirk Kerkorian, GMs largest individual investor (at 9.9\%) has called on the company to halve its $US1.1 billion annual dividend , cut executive pay and sell Saab
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Original:  General Motors Corporation (GM) has posted its first annual loss since 1992.
Revised:  (GM) has posted its first annual loss since 1992.
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Original:  Ford , the second of the big three American car manufacturers, beat predictions earlier in the week.
Revised:  , the second of the big three American car manufacturers, beat predictions earlier in the week.
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Original:  In contrast, Toyota is expected to report that it will beat last year's profit of $11 billion.
Revised:  In contrast, is expected to report that it will beat last year's profit of $11 billion.
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Original:  This has been attributed to GM's shrinking market share, which has been taken by Japanese manufacturers Toyota and Nissan .
Revised:  This has been attributed to GM's shrinking market share, which has been taken by Japanese manufacturers and .
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Original:  An aide for Kirk Kerkorian, GMs largest individual investor (at 9.9\%), has called on the company to halve its $1.1 billion annual dividend, cut executive pay and sell Saab
Revised:  An aide for Kirk Kerkorian, GMs largest individual investor (at 9.9\%), has called on the company to halve its $1.1 billion annual dividend, cut executive pay and sell 
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Original: Robin Gibb , and his twin brother , were born December 22, 1949, on the , raised in , and later lived in , . While the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England and later appeared on television while living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967.
Revised: Robin , and his twin brother , were born December 22, 1949, on the , raised in , and later lived in , . While the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England and later appeared on television while living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967.
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Original: Robin Gibb , and his twin brother , were born December 22, 1949, on the , raised in , and later lived in , . While the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England and later appeared on television while living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967.
Revised: Robin Gibb , and his twin brother , were born December 22, 1949, on the , raised in , and later lived in , . Whilst the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England and later appeared on television while living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967.
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Original: Robin Gibb , and his twin brother , were born December 22, 1949, on the , raised in , and later lived in , . While the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England and later appeared on television while living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967.
Revised: Robin Gibb , and his twin brother , were born December 22, 1949, on the , raised in , and later lived in , . While the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England , later appearing on television whilst living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967.
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Original:  While the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies, Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits, Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career , and he had one hit in England, which was called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
Revised:  Whilst the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies, Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits, Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career , and he had one hit in England, which was called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
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Original:  While the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies, Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits, Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career , and he had one hit in England, which was called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
Revised:  While the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies, Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits, Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career having one hit in England, which was called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
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Original:  While the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies, Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits, Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career , and he had one hit in England, which was called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
Revised:  While the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies, Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits, Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career , and he had one hit in England, called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
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Original:  Gibb is survived by his 65-year-old brother Barry and his sister and mother.
Revised:  Gibb is survived by his 65-year-old brother Barry his sister and mother.
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Original: Robin Gibb once said, "Since 1967, there have only been three albums that have truly affected the culture, and that's the ' , , and .
Revised: Robin Gibb once said, "Since 1967, there have only been three albums that have truly affected the culture, and that's the ' , , and .
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Original: Whilst the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England, later appearing on television whilst living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967;
Revised: While the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England, later appearing on television whilst living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967;
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Original: Whilst the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England, later appearing on television whilst living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967;
Revised: Whilst the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England, they later made appearances on television in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967;
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Original: Whilst the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England, later appearing on television whilst living in Australia, they had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967;
Revised: Whilst the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England, later appearing on television whilst living in Australia, but the brothers had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967;
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Original:  Whilst the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies,  Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits  , Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career having one hit in England, called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
Revised:  Whilst the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies, but Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits , Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career having one hit in England, called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
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