wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  A link between vasopressin release and aggression has been observed in females, which may impair female sexual reproduction arousal and sexual motivation by leading to feelings of neglect and hostility toward a sexual partner.
Revised:  A link between vasopressin release and aggression has been observed in females, which may impair female sexual arousal and sexual motivation by leading to feelings of neglect and hostility toward a sexual partner.
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Original:  Vasopressin levels have been shown to increase during erectile response in male sexual reproduction arousal, and decrease back to baseline following ejaculation.
Revised:  Vasopressin levels have been shown to increase during erectile response in male sexual arousal, and decrease back to baseline following ejaculation.
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Original:  In addition, female rats receiving doses of estrogen and progesterone were more likely to exert effort at gaining sexual reproduction attention from a male rat.
Revised:  In addition, female rats receiving doses of estrogen and progesterone were more likely to exert effort at gaining sexual attention from a male rat.
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Original:  Sexual orientation Little research has been conducted on the effect of hormones on reproduction motivation for same-sex sexual contact.
Revised:  Sexual orientation Little research has been conducted on the effect of hormones on sexual motivation for same-sex sexual contact.
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Original:  Both lesbian and bisexual women showed decreases in reproduction motivation for other-sex sexual contact at peak estrogen levels, with greater changes in the bisexual group than the lesbian group.
Revised:  Both lesbian and bisexual women showed decreases in sexual motivation for other-sex sexual contact at peak estrogen levels, with greater changes in the bisexual group than the lesbian group.
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Original:  Sexual reproduction Body odour and sexual attraction Hypoactive sexual desire disorder Sexual desire and intimate relationships Menopause Menstrual cycle Pheromone
Revised:  Body odour and sexual attraction Hypoactive sexual desire disorder Sexual desire and intimate relationships Menopause Menstrual cycle Pheromone
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Original: The Azania Liberation Front (ALF) was an armed faction  during the First Sudanese Civil War.
Revised: The Azania Liberation Front (ALF) was an armed faction rebeal during the First Sudanese Civil War.
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Original:  The name Azania was taken from  Greek, Azania was the name the Greeks designated to a countries located in East Africa south of Nubia.
Revised:  The name Azania was taken from the Greek, Azania was the name the Greeks designated to a countries located in East Africa south of Nubia.
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Original:  The name Azania was taken from  Greek, Azania was the name the Greeks designated to a countries located in East Africa south of Nubia.
Revised:  The name Azania was taken from Greek, Azania , the Greek designation for the lands of East Africa south of Nubia.
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Original:  Formed after February 1965 when the Sudan African National Union (SANU) was divided into two sectors, the home and foreign.
Revised:  The organisation was formed after February 1965 when the Sudan African National Union (SANU) was divided into two sectors, the home and foreign.
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Original:  Formed after February 1965 when the Sudan African National Union (SANU) was divided into two sectors, the home and foreign.
Revised:  Formed after February 1965 when the Sudan African National Union (SANU) split into two sectors, the home and foreign.
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Original:  In November 1964 Joseph Oduho, the first president of SANU, after losing the presidency of the group to Jaden left , spliting the organization.
Revised:  In November 1964 Joseph Oduho, the first president of SANU, after losing a bid for presidency of the group to Jaden left , spliting the organization.
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Original:  In November 1964 Joseph Oduho, the first president of SANU, after losing the presidency of the group to Jaden left , spliting the organization.
Revised:  In November 1964 Joseph Oduho, the first president of SANU, after losing the presidency of the group to Jaden left and in so doing, split the organization.
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Original:  On March 1965 Oduho formed his own organization, the Azania Liberation Front , Jaden then renamed the SANU loyalists the Sudan African Liberation Front.
Revised:  On March 1965 Oduho formed his own organization, the Azania Liberation Front ; Jaden then renamed the SANU loyalists the Sudan African Liberation Front.
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Original:  On March 1965 Oduho formed his own organization, the Azania Liberation Front , Jaden then renamed the SANU loyalists the Sudan African Liberation Front.
Revised:  On March 1965 Oduho formed his own organization, the Azania Liberation Front , Jaden then renamed his faction of SANU loyalists, the Sudan African Liberation Front.
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Original:  In June the two factions settled and by the end of 1965 they  decided to reunite under as the Azania Liberation Front with Oduho as the president and Aggrey Jaden as vice president.
Revised:  In June of the same year the two factions reached a settlement and by the end of 1965 they decided to reunite under as the Azania Liberation Front with Oduho as the president and Aggrey Jaden as vice president.
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Original:  In June the two factions settled and by the end of 1965 they  decided to reunite under as the Azania Liberation Front with Oduho as the president and Aggrey Jaden as vice president.
Revised:  In June the two factions settled and by the end of 1965 they had decided to reunite under as the Azania Liberation Front with Oduho as the president and Aggrey Jaden as vice president.
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Original:  The stripes were separated with white fimbriations separating the black from the red .
Revised:  The stripes were separated with white fimbriations .
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Original: The Azania Liberation Front (ALF) was an armed faction rebeal during the First Sudanese Civil War.
Revised: The Azania Liberation Front (ALF) was an armed rebel faction during the First Sudanese Civil War.
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Original:  The name Azania was taken from the Greek , Azania, the Greek designation for the lands of East Africa south of Nubia.
Revised:  Its name was taken from the Greek , Azania, the Greek designation for the lands of East Africa south of Nubia.
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Original:  The name Azania was taken from the Greek , Azania, the Greek designation for the lands of East Africa south of Nubia.
Revised:  The name Azania was taken from the Greek Azania, the Greek designation for the lands of East Africa south of Nubia.
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Original:  The organisation was formed after February 1965 when the Sudan African National Union (SANU ) split into two sectors, the home and foreign.
Revised:  The organisation was formed after February 1965 when the SANU split into two sectors, the home and foreign.
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Original:  For example, the paternal role has greater plasticity than the maternal role because males have a weaker motivation in the parenting context.
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Original:  Martin, C., Gebhard, P. Sexual Behavior in the Human Female, Philadelphia: Saunders (1953), . Researchers today believe that Kinsey overestimated the rate of same-sex attraction .
Revised:  Martin, C., Often, sexual orientation and sexual orientation identity are not distinguished, which can impact accurately assessing sexual identity and whether or not sexual orientation is able to change; sexual orientation identity can change throughout an individual's life, and may or may not align with biological sex, sexual behavior or actual sexual orientation.Sinclair, Karen, About Whoever: The Social Imprint on Identity and Orientation, NY, 2013 Sexual orientation is stable and unlikely to change for the vast majority of people, but some research indicates that some people may experience change in their sexual orientation, and this is more likely for women than for men. The American Psychological Association distinguishes between sexual orientation (an innate attraction) and sexual orientation identity (which may change at any point in a person's life) .
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Original: A 1996 study by Henry E. Adams et al. showed that a significant percentage of heterosexual men, both homophobic (80\%) and non-homophobic (34\%), became aroused by homosexual male pornography, as well as heterosexual and lesbian, suggesting that sexual arousal in men is also fluid.
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Original:  The usual explanation for this is that women's physical arousal is an evolutionary automatic response, to prevent damage during rape.
Revised:  This may be because women's physical arousal is an evolutionary automatic response, to prevent damage during rape.
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Original:  However, a study that measured sexual arousal through pupil dilation found that physical response of lesbian and bisexual women to erotic images was more category-specific  , with lesbian women showing more response to women, and bisexual women showing more response to the preferred sex than the other.
Revised:  A study that measured sexual arousal through pupil dilation found that physical response of lesbian and bisexual women to erotic images was more category-specific , with lesbian women showing more response to women, and bisexual women showing more response to the preferred sex than the other.
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Original:  This may be because women's physical arousal  is an evolutionary automatic response , to prevent damage during rape.
Revised:  This may be because women's physical arousal is an evolutionary automatic response to prevent damage during rape.
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Original:  Someone has "high erotic plasticity" when their sex drives can be affected by situational, social and cultural influences, whereas someone with “ low erotic plasticity ” has a sex drive that is relatively rigid and unsusceptible to change.
Revised:  Someone has "high erotic plasticity" when their sex drives can be affected by situational, social and cultural influences, whereas someone with " low erotic plasticity ” has a sex drive that is relatively rigid and unsusceptible to change.
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Original:  Someone has "high erotic plasticity" when their sex drives can be affected by situational, social and cultural influences, whereas someone with “ low erotic plasticity ” has a sex drive that is relatively rigid and unsusceptible to change.
Revised:  Someone has "high erotic plasticity" when their sex drives can be affected by situational, social and cultural influences, whereas someone with “ low erotic plasticity " has a sex drive that is relatively rigid and unsusceptible to change.
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Original:  Aggressive mimicry is when the hunter tricks the animal into thinking that they're also an animal in order to get closer.
Revised: Hunting strategies include: Aggressive mimicry is when the hunter tricks the animal into thinking that they're also an animal in order to get closer.
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Original: Hunting strategies include: Aggressive mimicry is when the hunter tricks the animal into thinking that they're also an animal in order to get closer.
Revised: Hunting strategies include: 
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Original:   Hunting strategies include: Baiting is the use of decoys, lures, scent or food to attract targeted animals.
Revised:  Still hunting is the process of hunting an animal by sneaking into habitats where the animal lives and trying to spot the animal before the animal spots you. The still hunting method of hunting is not the most popular hunting technique because it takes a fair amount of skill and time. Still hunting is an ancient method of hunting that was used by our ancestors to hunt and kill animals to eat. Still hunting is done by tracking animals down by looking for their tracks, droppings, mating signs, etc. and following this sign very carefully. When following the animal sign it is important to walk very slowly and very quietly while constantly scanning for movement and wildlife. It is also important to stop frequently to watch and listen for wildlife around you. Wind direction is another important aspect of still hunting because if the wind is blowing in the direction that you are walking, it is likely that the animal that you are hunting will smell you and scurry before you ever come into contact with the animal. Hunting strategies include: Baiting is the use of decoys, lures, scent or food to attract targeted animals.
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Original: Iraqi Kurds (, ), known locally as Southern Kurds (), are ethnic Kurds from Iraq.
Revised: Iraqi Kurds (, known locally as Southern Kurds (), are ethnic Kurds from Iraq.
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Original: Iraqi Kurds (, known locally as Southern Kurds () , are ethnic Kurds from Iraq .
Revised: Kurds in Iraq (, ) are people born in or residing in Iraq who are of Kurdish origin .
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Original: Kurds in Iraq (, ) are people born in or residing in Iraq who are of Kurdish origin.
Revised: Iraqi Kurds (, ) are people born in or residing in Iraq who are of Kurdish origin.
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Original: Pre-1991 According to Michael M. Gunter, the origin of Kurds is uncertain, but it is thought by some scholars that Kurds might be the descendants of various Indo-European tribes that arrived in the region about 4,000 years ago.
Revised: Pre-1991 According to Michael M. Gunter, the origin of Kurds is uncertain, but it is thought by some scholars that Kurds are the descendants of various Indo-European tribes that arrived in the region about 4,000 years ago.
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Original:  This lack of unity in scripture parallels Kurdish cultural history, for isolated Kurdish mountain tribes were often nomadic and therefore had a very limited written tradition .
Revised:  This lack of unity in scripture parallels Kurdish cultural history, for isolated Kurdish mountain tribes .
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Original: Pre-1991 According to Michael M. Gunter, the origin of Kurds is uncertain, but it is thought by some scholars that Kurds are the descendants of various Indo-European tribes that arrived in the region about 4,000 years ago.
Revised: Pre-1991 According to Michael M. Gunter, the origin of Kurds is uncertain, but it is thought by some scholars that Kurds might be the descendants of various Indo-European tribes that arrived in the region about 4,000 years ago.
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Original:  After the fall of Saddam Hussein 's regime in 2003, Iraqi Kurds, now governed by the Kurdistan Regional Government (KRG), face a crossroads in the political trajectory of Iraqi Kurdistan.
Revised:  After the fall of Saddam Hussein in 2003, Iraqi Kurds, now governed by the Kurdistan Regional Government (KRG), face a crossroads in the political trajectory of Iraqi Kurdistan.
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Original:  1991–2003 After the Gulf War and an unsuccessful Kurdish uprising in 1991, Kurds fled back to the mountains to seek refuge from the Hussein regime .
Revised:  1991–2003 After the Gulf War and an unsuccessful Kurdish uprising in 1991, Kurds fled back to the mountains to seek refuge from the government forces .
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Original:  The United States established a safe-haven and no fly zone initiative in Iraqi Kurdistan for the Kurds in order for them to develop an asylum away from the Hussein regime .
Revised:  The United States established a no fly zone initiative in Iraqi Kurdistan for the Kurds in order for them to develop an asylum away from the Hussein regime .
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Original:  The United States established a safe-haven and no fly zone initiative in Iraqi Kurdistan for the Kurds in order for them to develop an asylum away from the Hussein regime .
Revised:  The United States established a safe-haven and no fly zone initiative in Iraqi Kurdistan for the Kurds as an asylum away from the Hussein regime .
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Original:  The United States established a safe-haven and no fly zone initiative in Iraqi Kurdistan for the Kurds in order for them to develop an asylum away from the Hussein regime .
Revised:  The United States established a safe-haven and no fly zone initiative in Iraqi Kurdistan for the Kurds in order for them to develop an asylum away from the Iraqi government .
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Original:  2003–present When the US invaded to oust the Hussein regime in 2003, the northern Kurdish border with Iraqi central state was moved considerably southward.
Revised:  2003–present When the US invaded to oust the Iraqi government in 2003, the northern Kurdish border with Iraqi central state was moved considerably southward.
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Original:  The US invaded Iraq in order to take down Saddam Hussein 's regime and dissolve any threats of weapons of mass destruction.
Revised:  The US invaded Iraq in order to take down Saddam Hussein and dissolve any threats of weapons of mass destruction.
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Original:  After the fall of the regime , the United States government, with the help of ethnic leaders had to confront three issues: the nature of the future Iraqi government, how Shia representation was to be achieved in the government, and how Sunni re-enfranchisement was to be managed.
Revised:  After the fall of the government , the United States government, with the help of ethnic leaders had to confront three issues: the nature of the future Iraqi government, how Shia representation was to be achieved in the government, and how Sunni re-enfranchisement was to be managed.
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Original:  In about 1770, the Tuareg took possession of Gao, and in 1866 they entered Timbuktu and made the Pashalik their tributary ,therefore the pashalik collapsed .J.D. Fage (1975), p.17
Revised:  In about 1770, the Tuareg took possession of Gao, and in 1866 they entered Timbuktu and made the Pashalik their tributary .J.D. Fage (1975), p.17
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Original: In 1591, a Moroccan force which left Marrakesh with between three and four thousand soldiers, together with several hundred auxiliariesUNESCO General History of Africa, Vol. V., pg. 301 defeated the Songhay army at Tondibi and conquered Gao, Timbuktu and Djenné.
Revised: In 1591, a Moroccan force which left Marrakesh with between three and four thousand soldiers, together with several hundred auxiliariesUNESCO General History of Africa, Vol. V., pg. 301 defeated the Songhai army at Tondibi and conquered Gao, Timbuktu and Djenné.
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Original:  Möngke charged  Hulagu with leading a massive Mongol army to conquer or destroy the remaining Muslim states in southwestern Asia.
Revised:  Möngke charged ed Hulagu with leading a massive Mongol army to conquer or destroy the remaining Muslim states in southwestern Asia.
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Original:  Möngke charged ed Hulagu with leading a massive Mongol army to conquer or destroy the remaining Muslim states in southwestern Asia.
Revised:  Möngke charged Hulagu with leading a massive Mongol army to conquer or destroy the remaining Muslim states in southwestern Asia.
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Original: When news arrived that the Mongols had crossed the Jordan River in 1260, Sultan Qutuz and his forces , mainly Mamluks of Turkic origin, proceeded southeast toward the 'Spring Of Goliath' (Known in Arabic as 'Ain Jalut') in the Jezreel Valley.
Revised: When news arrived that the Mongols had crossed the Jordan River in 1260, Sultan Qutuz and his forces proceeded southeast toward the 'Spring Of Goliath' (Known in Arabic as 'Ain Jalut') in the Jezreel Valley.
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Original:  Nothing much is known of Hulagu's childhood except of an anectode given in Jami' al-Tawarikh and he once met his grandfather Genghis Khan with Kublai in 1224.
Revised:  Nothing much is known of Hulagu's childhood except of an anecdote given in Jami' al-Tawarikh and he once met his grandfather Genghis Khan with Kublai in 1224.
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Original: Coin of Hulagu, with the symbol of a hare After the succession was settled and his brother Kublai Khan was established as Great Khan, Hulagu returned to his lands by 1262.
Revised:  After the succession was settled and his brother Kublai Khan was established as Great Khan, Hulagu returned to his lands by 1262.
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Original: Horace L. Traubel ( 1858-1919 ) was an American essayist, poet, magazine publisher, author, and Georgist.
Revised: Horace L. Traubel ( 1858–1919 ) was an American essayist, poet, magazine publisher, author, and Georgist.
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Original: Horace L. Traubel (1858–1919) was an American essayist, poet, magazine publisher, author, and Georgist.
Revised: Horace Logo Traubel (1858–1919) was an American essayist, poet, magazine publisher, author, and Georgist.
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Original:  Police pursued Swart one day after he fired a shot at his neighbour, Mr Lourens, on 3 May 1927 for no apparent reason.
Revised: Timeline Police pursued Swart one day after he fired a shot at his neighbour, Mr Lourens, on 3 May 1927 for no apparent reason.
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Original:  By now Swart had killed two more people on the road, who had testified against him in a previous crime (incest ) for which he had been convicted and sentenced to several months in prison.
Revised:  By now Swart had killed two more people on the road, who had testified against him for incest for which he had been convicted and sentenced to several months in prison.
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Original:  Witnesses at previous trial Fannie Knight  G. Roets External links Seven Slain as Farmer Runs Amuck, New York Times, 7 May 1927.
Revised:  Witnesses at previous trial Fannie Knight G. Roets External links Seven Slain as Farmer Runs Amuck, 7 May 1927.
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Original: Physically removed the hazard — is the most effective hazard control.
Revised: Physical removal of the hazard is the most effective hazard control.
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Original:  Substitution, the second most effective hazard control, involves replacing something that produces a hazard (similar to elimination) with something that does not produce a hazard  —for example, replacing lead-based paint with titanium white.
Revised:  Substitution, the second most effective hazard control, involves replacing something that produces a hazard with something that does not produce a hazard —for example, replacing lead-based paint with titanium white.
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Original:  To be an effective control, the new product must not produce another hazard . Because airborne dust can be hazardous, if a product can be purchased with a larger particle size, the smaller product may effectively be substituted with the larger product.
Revised:  To be an effective control, the new product must not produce unintended consequences . Because airborne dust can be hazardous, if a product can be purchased with a larger particle size, the smaller product may effectively be substituted with the larger product.
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Original: Francis Hutcheson ( 1721-1784 ) was an Irish songwriter, physician and lecturer in chemistry.
Revised: Francis Hutcheson ( 1721–1784 ) was an Irish songwriter, physician and lecturer in chemistry.
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Original:  His parents were the philosopher Francis Hutcheson and his wife Mary (née Wilson)National Dictionary of Biography, "Francis Hutcheson" by L. M. Middleton, rev. K. D. Reynolds, retrieved 9 Aug 2013 His father was appointed to the Chair of Moral Philosophy in the University of Glasgow in 1729, necessitating a family move.
Revised:  His parents were the philosopher Francis Hutcheson and his wife Mary (née Wilson)National Dictionary of Biography, "Francis Hutcheson" by L. M. Middleton, rev. K. D. Reynolds, retrieved 9 August 2013 His father was appointed to the Chair of Moral Philosophy in the University of Glasgow in 1729, necessitating a family move.
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