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Original:  He was re-elected in 2003 but the party split in 2006 - with some members giving evidence against Sheridan in his court case - and Sheridan and another MSP, Rosemary Byrne, formed a new party, Solidarity.
Revised:  He was re-elected in 2003 but the party split in 2006 — with some members giving evidence against Sheridan in his court case - and Sheridan and another MSP, Rosemary Byrne, formed a new party, Solidarity.
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Original:  He was re-elected in 2003 but the party split in 2006 - with some members giving evidence against Sheridan in his court case - and Sheridan and another MSP, Rosemary Byrne, formed a new party, Solidarity.
Revised:  He was re-elected in 2003 but the party split in 2006 - with some members giving evidence against Sheridan in his court case — and Sheridan and another MSP, Rosemary Byrne, formed a new party, Solidarity.
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Original:  However, this party - and the remaining Scottish Socialists - lost all their seats in the 2007 election.
Revised:  However, this party — and the remaining Scottish Socialists - lost all their seats in the 2007 election.
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Original:  However, this party - and the remaining Scottish Socialists - lost all their seats in the 2007 election.
Revised:  However, this party - and the remaining Scottish Socialists — lost all their seats in the 2007 election.
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Original:  He is now studying law at Strathclyde University
Revised:  He is now studying law at the University of Strathclyde
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Original:  The newspaper had accused Mr  Sheridan of having an affair.
Revised:  The newspaper had accused Mr . Sheridan of having an affair.
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Original:  The newspaper had accused Mr . Sheridan of having an affair.
Revised:  The newspaper had accused Mr Sheridan of having an affair.
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Original:  The newspaper had accused Mr Sheridan of having an affair.
Revised:  The newspaper had accused Sheridan of having an affair.
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Original:  The newspaper had accused  Sheridan of having an affair.
Revised:  The newspaper had accused Tommy Sheridan of having an affair.
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Original: Tommy Sheridan Former member of the Scottish Parliament (MSP) Tommy Sheridan and his wife are to be tried for perjury .
Revised: Tommy Sheridan Former member of the Scottish (MSP) Tommy Sheridan and his wife are to be tried for perjury .
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Original: Tommy Sheridan Former member of the Scottish Parliament (MSP) Tommy Sheridan and his wife are to be tried for perjury .
Revised: Tommy Sheridan Former member of the Scottish Parliament (MSP) Tommy Sheridan and his wife are to be tried for .
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Original:  This led to an investigation by Lothian and Borders Police .
Revised:  This led to an investigation by .
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Original:  Sheridan established the Scottish Socialist Alliance in 1996, which became the Scottish Socialist Party and stood in the 1999 elections to the newly re-established Scottish Parliament.
Revised:  Sheridan established the Scottish Socialist Alliance in 1996, which became the and stood in the 1999 elections to the newly re-established Scottish Parliament.
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Original:  After leaving Holyrood, Sheridan hosted a chat show at the Edinburgh fringe and had a talk radio show before joining the latest series of Channel 4's Celebrity Big Brother .
Revised:  After leaving Holyrood, Sheridan hosted a chat show at the Edinburgh fringe and had a talk radio show before joining the latest series of 's .
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Original:  He is now studying law at the University of Strathclyde
Revised:  He is now studying law at the 
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Original:  The closer of the call centre was said to be part of the company’s transformation to an online-led business.
Revised:  The closure of the call centre was said to be part of the company’s transformation to an online-led business.
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Original:  Chief Executive of Shop Direct, Mark Newton Jones  said that Shop Direct is a strong and growing business and puts the cuts down to the way customers shop with the company.
Revised:  Chief Executive of Shop Direct, Mark Newton Jones , said that Shop Direct is a strong and growing business and puts the cuts down to the way customers shop with the company.
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Original:  Over the 2008 Christmas period group sales were up 9\% and online sales were up by 44\%.
Revised: "Our business is changing because the way our customers choose to shop with us is changing. We are a strong and growing business. In order to maintain this growth, we need to continue to adapt and change to the needs of our customers," said Jones in a statement. Over the 2008 Christmas period group sales were up 9\% and online sales were up by 44\%.
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Original:  Iranian President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad called on the United States to substantially change its foreign policy towards Iran, in an address aimed at the new Barack Obama administration.
Revised:  Iranian President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad called on the United States to substantially change its foreign policy toward Iran, in an address aimed at the new Barack Obama administration.
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Original:  Other US officals seemed to reflect a more conciliatory tone towards Iran than the previous administration.
Revised:  Other US officials seemed to reflect a more conciliatory tone towards Iran than the previous administration.
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Original:  United Nations ambassador Susan Rice pledged "direct" support to Iran only if it halts its controversial nuclear program, which Iran insists is for peaceful energy purposes.
Revised:  US ambassador to the United Nations Susan Rice pledged "direct" support to Iran only if it halts its controversial nuclear program, which Iran insists is for peaceful energy purposes.
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Original:  Iranian President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad called on the United States to substantially change its foreign policy toward Iran , in an address aimed at the new Barack Obama administration.
Revised:  Iranian President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad called on the United States to substantially change its foreign policy toward Iran in an address aimed at the new Barack Obama administration.
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Original: A man from New Zealand has found sensitive data belonging to the United States Armed Forces on a used MP3 player.
Revised: A man from New Zealand has found data belonging to the United States Armed Forces on a used MP3 player.
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Original:  Also in 2008, John McCain's presidental campaign accidentally sold a BlackBerry, which held sensitive data about the campaign, to a reporter
Revised:  Also in 2008, John McCain's presidential campaign accidentally sold a BlackBerry, which held sensitive data about the campaign, to a reporter
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Original: File:Tailor shop in Nashik, India.jpg| 250px| The ILO warns that Subsaharan Africa and South Asia will majorly affected by the worsening job market.
Revised: File:Tailor shop in Nashik, India.jpg| The ILO warns that Subsaharan Africa and South Asia will majorly affected by the worsening job market.
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Original: File:Tailor shop in Nashik, India.jpg| 250px| The ILO warns that Subsaharan Africa and South Asia will majorly affected by the worsening job market.
Revised: File:Tailor shop in Nashik, India.jpg| 250px| The ILO warns that Subsaharan Africa and South Asia will harshly affected by the worsening job market.
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Original:  The report warns that developing countries in South Asia and Subsaharan Africa will be majorly affected by the economic crisis.
Revised:  The report warns that developing countries in South Asia and Subsaharan Africa will be harshly affected by the economic crisis.
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Original: There were a violent riot in the Zwinglio Ferreira Prision , located in Presidente Venceslau, in the São Paulo State, Brazil.
Revised: There were a violent riot in the "Zwinglio Ferreira" Prison , located in Presidente Venceslau, in the São Paulo State, Brazil.
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Original: There were a violent riot in the "Zwinglio Ferreira" Prison, located in Presidente Venceslau, in the São Paulo State, Brazil.
Revised: There were a violent riot in the "Zwinglio Ferreira" Prison, located in Presidente Venceslau, São Paulo State, Brazil.
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Original:  Five prisoners had been beheaded and got his heads exhibited by the rioters.
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Original:  The rebellion began Tuesday, at 8:30 a.m. and it finished Wednesday at 2:30 p.m. Some heads belonging to the murdered condemneds were put in iron spears so they could be exhibited in the roof of the prison.
Revised:  The rebellion began Tuesday, at 8:30 a.m. and it finished Wednesday at 2:30 p.m. Some heads belonging to the murdered prisoners were put on iron spears so they could be exhibited in the roof of the prison.
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Original:  The rebellion began Tuesday, at 8:30 a.m. and it finished Wednesday at 2:30 p.m. Some heads belonging to the murdered condemneds were put in iron spears so they could be exhibited in the roof of the prison.
Revised:  The rebellion began Tuesday, at 8:30 a.m. and it finished Wednesday at 2:30 p.m. Some heads belonging to the murdered condemneds were put in iron spears so they could be shown from the roof of the prison.
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Original:  Some prisoners played soccer with one of the heads.
Revised:  Some prisoners played football with one of the heads.
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Original: The accident is one in a long range in China's mines, which are among the unsafest in the world.
Revised: China has a long history of accidents in its mines, which are among the unsafest in the world.
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Original:  Only last month, more than 150 people died after a gas explosion in a mine in the Henan province  .
Revised:  Last month, more than 150 people died after a gas explosion in a mine in the Henan province .
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Original: China has a long history of accidents in its mines, which are among the unsafest in the world.
Revised: China has a long history of accidents in its mines, which are among the most dangerous in the world.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References BBC, November 28, 2004: China mine blast traps 170 workers Category:November 28, 2004 Category:Chi
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References BBC, November 28, 2004: China mine blast traps 170 workers Category:November 28, 2004 Category:Chi
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References BBC, November 28, 2004: China mine blast traps 170 workers 
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Original:  Early in the morning on Sunday November 28th, 170 workers were trapped in the Chinese Chenjiashan mine,  the BBC reports.
Revised:  Around 170 workers were trapped in the Chinese Chenjiashan mine, the BBC reports.
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Original:  According to Chinese state officials , 123 workers managed to escape the facilities.
Revised:  Chinese state officials , 123 workers managed to escape the facilities.
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Original:  According to Chinese state officials , 123 workers managed to escape the facilities.
Revised:  According to Chinese state officials said that 123 workers managed to escape the facilities.
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Original:  China has  a long history of accidents in its mines , which are among the most dangerous in the world.
Revised:  China has had a long history of accidents in its mines , which are among the most dangerous in the world.
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Original:  China has  a long history of accidents in its mines , which are among the most dangerous in the world.
Revised:  China has a long history of mining accidents —its mines are known as being among the most dangerous in the world.
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Original:  However, the official tally of 4,153  fatalities during the first nine months of this year is  a 13\% improvement over the same period last year . References BBC, November 28, 2004: China mine blast traps 170 workers 
Revised:  The official tally of 4,153 fatalities during the first nine months of this year is a 13\% improvement over the same period last year . References BBC, November 28, 2004: China mine blast traps 170 workers 
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Original:  However, the official tally of 4,153  fatalities during the first nine months of this year is  a 13\% improvement over the same period last year . References BBC, November 28, 2004: China mine blast traps 170 workers 
Revised:  However, the official tally of 4,153 fatalities during the first nine months of this year is actually a 13\% improvement over the same period last year . References BBC, November 28, 2004: China mine blast traps 170 workers 
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Original: China has had a long history of mining accidents —its mines are known as being among the most dangerous in the world.
Revised: China has had an long history of mining accidents —its mines are known as being among the most dangerous in the world.
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Original: China has had an long history of mining accidents —its mines are known as being among the most dangerous in the world.
Revised: China has had a long history of mining accidents —its mines are known as being among the most dangerous in the world.
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Original:  Nelson also thinks that the bill is not truely stimulus but they would constitute spending.
Revised:  Nelson also thinks that the bill is not truly stimulus but they would constitute spending.
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Original:  Sen. Johanns also said he thinks none of it will be paid for and their will be floating debt . Category:Nebras
Revised:  Sen. Johanns also said he thinks none of it will be paid for and their will be floating debt Category:Nebras
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Original:  Sen. Johanns also said he thinks none of it will be paid for and their will be floating debt . Category:Nebras
Revised:  Sen. Johanns also said he thinks none of it will be paid for and their will be floating debt . 
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Original: The 2 senators of Nebraska are not sure if they will be backing President Obama's $819 billion dollar stimulus plan or not.
Revised: The two senators of Nebraska are not sure if they will be backing President Obama's $819 billion dollar stimulus plan or not.
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Original:  Nelson wants to see more jobs created for Nebraskans . Nelson also thinks that the bill is not truly stimulus but they would constitute spending.
Revised:  Nelson wants to see more jobs created for Nebraskans , and believes the bill is not truly stimulus but they would constitute spending.
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Original:  Nelson wants to see more jobs created for Nebraskans . Nelson also thinks that the bill is not truly stimulus but they would constitute spending.
Revised:  Nelson wants to see more jobs created for Nebraskans . Nelson also thinks that the bill is not truly stimulus but simply constitutes spending.
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Original:  Republican Sen. Johanns agreed mostly with Nelson and he also pointed out the stimulus money for the National Endowment for the Arts  . Sen. Johanns also said he thinks none of it will be paid for and their will be floating debt
Revised:  Republican Sen. Johanns agreed mostly with Nelson , but also pointed out the stimulus money for the National Endowment for the Arts . Sen. Johanns also said he thinks none of it will be paid for and their will be floating debt
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Original:  Republican Sen. Johanns agreed mostly with Nelson and he also pointed out the stimulus money for the National Endowment for the Arts  . Sen. Johanns also said he thinks none of it will be paid for and their will be floating debt
Revised:  Republican Sen. Johanns agreed mostly with Nelson and he also pointed out the stimulus money for the National Endowment for the Arts . Sen. Johanns also said he thinks none of it will be paid for and there will be floating debt
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Original: The two senators of Nebraska are not sure if they will be backing President  Obama's $819 billion dollar stimulus plan, in spite of the expected house's approval on Wednesday.
Revised: The two senators of Nebraska are not sure if they will be backing President Barack Obama's $819 billion dollar stimulus plan, in spite of the expected house's approval on Wednesday.
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Original:  Around $ 27 billion  highway funds are found in stimulus appropriations in which Nelson said he supported as a member of the Senate Appropriations Committee.
Revised:  Around $ 27 billion dollars in highway funds are found in stimulus appropriations in which Nelson said he supported as a member of the Senate Appropriations Committee.
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Original:  Around $ 27 billion  highway funds are found in stimulus appropriations in which Nelson said he supported as a member of the Senate Appropriations Committee.
Revised:  Around $ 27 billion highway funds are found in stimulus appropriations , which Nelson said he supported as a member of the Senate Appropriations Committee.
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Original:  The package is also said to  help build hospitals in rural areas and community health centers.
Revised:  The package is also said to help build hospitals in rural areas , as well as community health centers.
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Original:  Construction and repair of veterans medical facilities and to help drinking and wastewater infrastructure are also included.
Revised:  Money for the construction and repair of veterans medical facilities and to help drinking and wastewater infrastructure are also included.
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Original:  Construction and repair of veterans medical facilities and to help drinking and wastewater infrastructure are also included.
Revised:  Construction and repair of veterans medical facilities , and funding to help drinking and wastewater infrastructure are also included.
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Original:  Sen. Johanns commented that he thinks none of it will be paid for, and is funded by floating debt
Revised:  Sen. Johanns commented that he thinks none of it will be paid for, but instead will be funded by floating debt
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Original:  Ben Nelson (Democrat) said a $ 1.1 billion bill for medical research was troublesome.
Revised:  Ben Nelson (Democrat) said a $ 1.1 billion for medical research was troublesome.
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Original:  The raid came several hours after Israel bombed a metal foundry in Rafah that Israel claims was producing rockets 
Revised:  The raid came several hours after Israel bombed a metal foundry in Rafah that Israel claims was producing rockets .
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Original:  Both Hamas and Israel have claimed seperate ceasefires after one of the bloodiest strings of violence in the history of Gaza that left 1,400 Palestinians dead including as many as 400 children and 100 women.
Revised:  Both Hamas and Israel have claimed separate ceasefires after one of the bloodiest strings of violence in the history of Gaza that left 1,400 Palestinians dead including as many as 400 children and 100 women.
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Original:  They are: Christian Panganiban , Rodelio Iso, Mylene Iso and Marlon Rodrin, said radio dzBB's Denver Trinidad.
Revised:  They are: Christian Panganiban , Rodelio Iso, Marlon Rodrin, said radio dzBB's Denver Trinidad.
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Original: Four of the 8 fatalities have already been identified by factory officials.
Revised: Four of the eight fatalities have already been identified by factory officials.
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Original:  The fire was declared out around 2:33 p.m.
Revised:  The fire was declared to be out at around 2:33 p.m.
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Original:  They were rushed to the General Emilio Aguinaldo Memorial Hospital, Korean-Philippines Friendship Hospital, Treceno Medical Pavillion and Mark Jem Hospital, and are still being treated for third degree burns and shards of glass cuts , said Ryan Lucero, acting area manager of SFF factory and the Office of the Civil Defense-Regional Disaster Coordinating Center.
Revised:  They were rushed to the General Emilio Aguinaldo Memorial Hospital, Korean-Philippines Friendship Hospital, Treceno Medical Pavillion and Mark Jem Hospital, and are still being treated for third-degree burns and cuts from glass shards , said Ryan Lucero, acting area manager of SFF factory and the Office of the Civil Defense-Regional Disaster Coordinating Center.
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Original:  One crater gouged measured at least 200 meters wide.
Revised:  One crater measured at least 200 meters wide.
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Original:  According to Cavite police Superintendent Reynaldo Galam, the mutilated bodies of two men and a woman were recovered outside the SFF compound near a residential area in Trece Martires city in Cavite province . Jonathan Seramillo, Cavite NBI medico legal officer, said a commercial area, including the Cavite Provincial Capitol  suffered damages even both are one kilometer away from the explosion site, while 2 vehicles were also damaged.
Revised:  According to Cavite police Superintendent Reynaldo Galam, the mutilated bodies of two men and a woman were recovered outside the SFF compound near a residential area in Trece Martires city . Jonathan Seramillo, Cavite NBI medico legal officer, said a commercial area, including the Cavite Provincial Capitol suffered damages even both are one kilometer away from the explosion site, while 2 vehicles were also damaged.
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Original:  According to Cavite police Superintendent Reynaldo Galam, the mutilated bodies of two men and a woman were recovered outside the SFF compound near a residential area in Trece Martires city in Cavite province . Jonathan Seramillo, Cavite NBI medico legal officer, said a commercial area, including the Cavite Provincial Capitol  suffered damages even both are one kilometer away from the explosion site, while 2 vehicles were also damaged.
Revised:  According to Cavite police Superintendent Reynaldo Galam, the mutilated bodies of two men and a woman were recovered outside the SFF compound near a residential area in Trece Martires city in Cavite province . Jonathan Seramillo, Cavite NBI medico legal officer, said a commercial area, including the Cavite Provincial Capitol , suffered damages even both are one kilometer away from the explosion site, while 2 vehicles were also damaged.
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Original:  The explosion has also caused part of the factory roof to land more than a mile ( 1.5 kilometers ) away, and toppled concrete walls.
Revised:  The explosion has also caused part of the factory roof to land more than 1.5 kilometers ) away, and toppled concrete walls.
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Original:  Sagun Jr. has cited reports that "the incident stemmed from a test of fireworks that went awry," adding  the fireworks were to be delivered to the SM Mall of Asia in Pasay City.
Revised:  Sagun Jr. has cited reports that "the incident stemmed from a test of fireworks that went awry," adding that the fireworks were to be delivered to the SM Mall of Asia in Pasay City.
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Original:  "The one who tested it violated a rule barring testing inside the compound," he added, and explained  the factory is inside an industrial zone.
Revised:  "The one who tested it violated a rule barring testing inside the compound," he added, and explained that the factory is inside an industrial zone.
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Original:  Romeo Ucag, who assisted in putting off the blaze, adding, "he heard the explosion and saw a thick column of smoke from his post in Tanza, Cavite, six miles (10 kilometers) north of Trece Martires."
Revised:  Romeo Ucag, who assisted in putting out the blaze, adding, "he heard the explosion and saw a thick column of smoke from his post in Tanza, Cavite, six miles (10 kilometers) north of Trece Martires."
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