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Original:  The quotation was, "Show me just what Muhammad brought that was new  and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached . " The pope added that in his opinion violence is "incompatible with the nature of God and the nature of the soul", and that he intended to broaden and apply reason.
Revised:  The quotation was, "Show me just what Muhammad brought that was new and there you will find things only evil and inhuman, such as his command to spread by the sword the faith he preached . " .
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Original:  The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" . Among others the head of the Muslim Brotherhood stated that this quotation "aroused the anger of the whole Islamic world".
Revised:  The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" Among others the head of the Muslim Brotherhood stated that this quotation "aroused the anger of the whole Islamic world".
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Original: The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" .
Revised: The Pope also criticized the Western world for alienating other cultures and "excluding God" 
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Muslim world condemns Pope's criticism of Islam Mujahedeen Army issues threat of attack on Vatican City Pope apologises in person for the reaction to his comments Nun murdered in Somalia after Pope's speech Pope Benedict apologizes for "sounding offensive" to Muslim
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Muslim world condemns Pope's criticism of Islam Mujahedeen Army issues threat of attack on Vatican City Pope apologises in person for the reaction to his comments Nun murdered in Somalia after Pope's speech Pope Benedict apologizes for "sounding offensive" to Muslim
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Muslim world condemns Pope's criticism of Islam Mujahedeen Army issues threat of attack on Vatican City Pope apologises in person for the reaction to his comments Nun murdered in Somalia after Pope's speech Pope Benedict apologizes for "sounding offensive" to Muslim
Revised:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  "That's the last thing Steve would want," said Michael Hornby, a friend of Irwin   
Revised:  "That's the last thing Steve would want," said Michael Hornby, a friend of Irwin . 
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Original: His name was Kimveer Gill .
Revised: The gunman was Kimveer Gill .
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Original: After substantial gains yesterday, stocks rallied again this afternoon  closing at 11,543.32 up 45.23 from yesterday and reaching four month highs .
Revised: After substantial gains yesterday, stocks rallied again this afternoon closing at 11,543.32 up 45.23 from yesterday and reaching it's four month high .
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Original:  This despite the fact that  oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents closing at $63.97  after seven days of losses, this occured after the U.S. Department of energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
Revised:  This despite the fact that crude oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents closing at $63.97 after seven days of losses, this occured after the U.S. Department of energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
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Original:  This despite the fact that  oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents closing at $63.97  after seven days of losses, this occured after the U.S. Department of energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
Revised:  This despite the fact that oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents closing at $63.97 a barrel after seven days of losses, this occured after the U.S. Department of energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
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Original:  The Dow Jones Idustrial Average closing at 11,543.32  up 45.23 from yesterday and reaching it's four month high.
Revised:  The Dow Jones Idustrial Average closed at 11,543.32 up 45.23 from yesterday and reaching it's four month high.
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Original:  The Dow Jones Idustrial Average closing at 11,543.32  up 45.23 from yesterday and reaching it's four month high.
Revised:  The Dow Jones Idustrial Average closing at 11,543.32 , up 45.23 from yesterday and reaching it's four month high.
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Original:  The Dow Jones Idustrial Average closing at 11,543.32  up 45.23 from yesterday and reaching it's four month high.
Revised:  The Dow Jones Idustrial Average closing at 11,543.32 up 45.23 from yesterday and reached a four month high.
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Original:  This despite the fact that crude oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents  closing at $63.97 a barrel after seven days of losses , this occured after the U.S. Department of energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
Revised:  This despite the fact that crude oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents , closing at $63.97 a barrel after seven days of losses , this occured after the U.S. Department of energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
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Original:  This despite the fact that crude oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents  closing at $63.97 a barrel after seven days of losses , this occured after the U.S. Department of energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
Revised:  This despite the fact that crude oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents closing at $63.97 a barrel after seven days of losses . The increase came after the U.S. Department of energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
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Original:  This despite the fact that crude oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents  closing at $63.97 a barrel after seven days of losses , this occured after the U.S. Department of energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
Revised:  This despite the fact that crude oil showed a slight rebound today of 21 cents closing at $63.97 a barrel after seven days of losses , this occured after the U.S. Department of Energy reported that crude oil inventories fell more than expected last week
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Original:  The Dow Jones Idustrial Average closed at 11,543.32, up 45.23 from yesterday and reached a four month high.
Revised:  The Dow Jones Industrial Average closed at 11,543.32, up 45.23 from yesterday and reached a four month high.
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Original:  They discussed a number of issues including border security, Canada's role in Afghanistan, and support for the war  
Revised:  They discussed a number of issues including border security, Canada's role in Afghanistan, and support for the war . 
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Original:  They discussed a number of issues including border security, Canada's role in Afghanistan, and support for the war . External links Photos of the visit at Peter MacKay's websit
Revised:  They discussed a number of issues including border security, Canada's role in Afghanistan, and support for the war External links Photos of the visit at Peter MacKay's websit
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Original:  They discussed a number of issues including border security, Canada's role in Afghanistan, and support for the war . External links Photos of the visit at Peter MacKay's websit
Revised:  They discussed a number of issues including border security, Canada's role in Afghanistan, and support for the war . 
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Original:  It was a a 90-minute drive each way from Halifax.
Revised:  It was a 90-minute drive each way from Halifax.
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Original:  Rice and MacKay took a stop at the Tim Hortons in Pictou, Nova Scotia.
Revised:  Rice and MacKay took a stop at the Tim Horton's in Pictou, Nova Scotia.
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Original: The byelection in Parkdale-High Park is to replace former education minister Gerard Kennedy , who left the provincial post to join the leadership race for the federal Liberal party.
Revised: Voting is underway in a provincial byelection in Parkdale-High Park is to replace former education minister Gerard Kennedy , who left the provincial post to join the leadership race for the federal Liberal party.
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Original: The byelection in Parkdale-High Park is to replace former education minister Gerard Kennedy , who left the provincial post to join the leadership race for the federal Liberal party.
Revised: The byelection in Parkdale-High Park , Ontario to elect a replacement former education minister Gerard Kennedy , who left the provincial post to join the leadership race for the federal Liberal party.
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Original: The byelection in Parkdale-High Park is to replace former education minister Gerard Kennedy , who left the provincial post to join the leadership race for the federal Liberal party.
Revised: The byelection in Parkdale-High Park is to replace former education minister Gerard Kennedy who left the provincial post to join the leadership race for the federal Liberal party.
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Original:  The education minister Sandra Pupatello has now accused NDP candidate and United Church Minister Cheri DiNovo of comparing media coverage of Karla Homolka's release from prison to the persecution of Jesus Christ.
Revised:  The new education minister, Sandra Pupatello, has accused NDP candidate and United Church Minister Cheri DiNovo of comparing media coverage of Karla Homolka's release from prison to the persecution of Jesus Christ.
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Original:  Political parties are doing everything they can to win the riding . People in the riding will vote today
Revised:  Political parties are doing everything they can to win the riding People in the riding will vote today
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Original:  Political parties are doing everything they can to win the riding . People in the riding will vote today
Revised:  Political parties are doing everything they can to win the riding . 
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Original: Chavez says planted demolitions in World Trade Center 'plausible' Venezuelan President Hugo Chavez stated the U.S. government may have planned the attacks on Sept. 11.
Revised:  Venezuelan President Hugo Chavez stated the U.S. government may have planned the attacks on Sept. 11.
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Original:  He said the attacks have been used to justify U.S. "aggression" throughout the Middle East and  9/11 conspiracy theories are plausible.
Revised:  He said the attacks have been used to justify U.S. "aggression" throughout the Middle East and also that 9/11 conspiracy theories are plausible.
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Original:  He also said "A building never collapses like that, unless it ’ s with an implosion."
Revised:  He also said "A building never collapses like that, unless it ' s with an implosion."
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Original:  The effort is a part of the Global Polio Eradication Initiative , a  16 year old private-public project which aims to add Poliomyelitis to the list of childhood diseases which have been eliminated.
Revised:  The Global Polio Eradication Initiative , a 16 year old private-public project which aims to add Poliomyelitis to the list of childhood diseases which have been eliminated.
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Original:  The effort is a part of the Global Polio Eradication Initiative , a  16 year old private-public project which aims to add Poliomyelitis to the list of childhood diseases which have been eliminated.
Revised:  The effort is a part of the Global Polio Eradication Initiative , a The 16 year old private-public project which aims to add Poliomyelitis to the list of childhood diseases which have been eliminated.
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Original:  The effort is a part of the Global Polio Eradication Initiative , a  16 year old private-public project which aims to add Poliomyelitis to the list of childhood diseases which have been eliminated.
Revised:  The effort is a part of the Global Polio Eradication Initiative , a 16 year old private-public project aims to add Poliomyelitis to the list of childhood diseases which have been eliminated.
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Original:  The World Health Organization, Rotary International, the U.S. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention and UNICEF are leading the Initiative and coordinating a series of overlapping immunization campaigns in the region   .
Revised:  The World Health Organization, Rotary International, the U.S. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention and UNICEF are leading the Initiative and coordinating a series of overlapping immunization campaigns in the region . .
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Original:  The members of parlement for his CDA party will now propose new laws to prohibit any party that stands for principles which conflict with the constitution of the Netherlands . NRC.nl: Donner wil geen verbod op shari’a Nu.nl: CDA wil verbod op shariapartij en pedopart
Revised:  The members of parlement for his CDA party will now propose new laws to prohibit any party that stands for principles which conflict with the constitution of the Netherlands NRC.nl: Donner wil geen verbod op shari’a Nu.nl: CDA wil verbod op shariapartij en pedopart
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Original:  The members of parlement for his CDA party will now propose new laws to prohibit any party that stands for principles which conflict with the constitution of the Netherlands . NRC.nl: Donner wil geen verbod op shari’a Nu.nl: CDA wil verbod op shariapartij en pedopart
Revised:  The members of parlement for his CDA party will now propose new laws to prohibit any party that stands for principles which conflict with the constitution of the Netherlands . 
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Original: The Dutch Minister of Justice, mr Donner is under presure of his own party, the Christian Democrats (CDA), for claiming that the Sharia can become effective in the Netherlands if 2/3 of the Dutch people vote for it.
Revised: The Dutch Minister of Justice, Piet Hein Donner is under presure of his own party, the Christian Democrats (CDA), for claiming that the Sharia can become effective in the Netherlands if 2/3 of the Dutch people vote for it.
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Original: The Dutch Minister of Justice, mr Donner is under presure of his own party, the Christian Democrats (CDA), for claiming that the Sharia can become effective in the Netherlands if 2/3 of the Dutch people vote for it.
Revised: The Dutch Minister of Justice, mr Donner is under presure from his own party, the Christian Democrats (CDA), for claiming that the Sharia can become effective in the Netherlands if 2/3 of the Dutch people vote for it.
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Original: The Dutch Minister of Justice, mr Donner is under presure of his own party, the Christian Democrats (CDA), for claiming that the Sharia can become effective in the Netherlands if 2/3 of the Dutch people vote for it.
Revised: The Dutch Minister of Justice, mr Donner is under presure of his own party, the Christian Democrats (CDA), for claiming that Sharia law could come into effect in the Netherlands if 2/3 of the Dutch people vote for it.
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Original: While the majority of mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for the sharia, mr Donner said it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
Revised: While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for the sharia, mr Donner said it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
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Original: While the majority of mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for the sharia, mr Donner said it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
Revised: While the majority of mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for the sharia, Mr Donner said it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
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Original:  His party member of parlement are against this and demanded that their minister agrees.
Revised:  His party member of parliament are against this and demanded that their minister agrees.
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Original:  Mr Donner apologised for his remark to cause a rife in parlement , he wanted to clear the controversy that he would be in favour of the Sharia law, as he is strongly against it.
Revised:  Mr Donner apologised for his remark to cause a rife in parliament , he wanted to clear the controversy that he would be in favour of the Sharia law, as he is strongly against it.
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Original:  However he firmly believes it is the foundation of democracy that even people with different opinions are allowed to express their opnions .
Revised:  However he firmly believes it is the foundation of democracy that even people with different opinions are allowed to express their opinions .
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Original:  The members of parlement for his CDA party will now propose new laws to prohibit any party that stands for principles which conflict with the constitution of the Netherlands
Revised:  The members of parliament for his CDA party will now propose new laws to prohibit any party that stands for principles which conflict with the constitution of the Netherlands
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Original: While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for the sharia , Mr Donner said it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
Revised: While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for Sharia law , Mr Donner said it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
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Original: While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for the sharia , Mr Donner said it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
Revised: While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for the sharia , Mr Donner has said that it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
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Original:  His party member of parliament are against this and demanded that their minister agrees .
Revised:  His party members in parliament oppose his statements .
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Original:  Mr Donner apologised for his remark to cause a rife in parliament, he wanted to clear the controversy that he would be in favour of the Sharia law, as he is strongly against it .
Revised:  Mr Donner apologised that his remarks have caused a rife in parliament, he wanted to clear the controversy that he would be in favour of the Sharia law, as he is strongly against it .
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Original:  Mr Donner apologised for his remark to cause a rife in parliament, he wanted to clear the controversy that he would be in favour of the Sharia law, as he is strongly against it .
Revised:  Mr Donner apologised for his remark to cause a rife in parliament, and clearly stated that he is against Sharia law .
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Original: The Dutch Minister of Justice, Piet Hein Donner is under presure from his own party, the Christian Democrats (CDA), for claiming that  Sharia law could come into effect in the Netherlands  . Donner's controversial assertion is made in a recently released book , where he stated, "if two-thirds of Dutch people want to introduce Shari'ah that should be possible" .
Revised: The Dutch Minister of Justice, Piet Hein Donner is under presure from his own party, the Christian Democrats (CDA), for claiming that Sharia law could come into effect in the Netherlands . Donner's controversial assertion was made in a recently released book , where he stated, "if two-thirds of Dutch people want to introduce Shari'ah that should be possible" .
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Original:  While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for Sharia law, Mr Donner has said that it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
Revised:  While the majority of the CDA MPs are against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for Sharia law, Mr Donner has said that it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
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Original:  While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for Sharia law, Mr Donner has said that it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
Revised:  While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of a Muslim political party which stands for Sharia law, Mr Donner has said that it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
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Original:  While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for Sharia law, Mr Donner has said that it is the foundation of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
Revised:  While the majority of Mr Donner's party is against the creation of any Muslim party which stands for Sharia law, Mr Donner has said that it is a the essence of democracy that Muslims are able to try to reach their objectives by democratic means, even if the current majority is against those goals.
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Original:  Mr Donner apologised  that his remarks have caused a rife in parliament, and clearly stated that he is against Sharia law.
Revised:  Mr Donner apologised for the rife in parliament that his remarks have caused a rife in parliament, and clearly stated that he is against Sharia law.
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Original:  Mr Donner apologised  that his remarks have caused a rife in parliament, and clearly stated that he is against Sharia law.
Revised:  Mr Donner apologised that his remarks have caused and clearly stated that he is against Sharia law.
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Original:  However he firmly believes it is the foundation of democracy thateven people with different opinions are allowed to express their opinions.
Revised:  However , he reiterated his belief that, in a democracy, people with different opinions are allowed to express their opinions.
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Original:  The members of parliament for his CDA party will now propose new laws to prohibit any party that stands for principles which conflict with the constitution of the Netherlands
Revised:  CDA MPs are set to propose new laws to prohibit any party that stands for principles which conflict with the constitution of the Netherlands
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