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Original:  Additionally, Cobos Batres was able to inflame the national sentiment of conservative criollo leaders José Azmitia, Tácito Molina, Eduardo Camacho, Julio Bianchi and Emilio Escamilla into forming a Central America Unionist party and oppose the strong regime of Estrada Cabrera.
Revised:  Additionally, Cobos Batres was able to inflame the national sentiment of conservative criollo leaders José Azmitia, Tácito Molina, Eduardo Camacho, Julio Bianchi and Emilio Escamilla into forming a Central America Unionist party and opposing the strong-arm regime of Estrada Cabrera.
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Original:  The Unionist party began its activities with the support of several sectors of the Guatemala City society, among them the Universidad Estrada Cabrera studentsUniversidad de San Carlos was called Universidad "Estrada Cabrera" since 1918. and the labor associations, who under the leadership of Silverio Ortiz founded the Patriotic Labor Committee.
Revised:  The Unionist party began its activities with the support of several sectors of Guatemala City society, among them the Universidad Estrada Cabrera studentsUniversidad de San Carlos was called Universidad "Estrada Cabrera" since 1918. and the labor associations, who under the leadership of Silverio Ortiz founded the Patriotic Labor Committee.
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Original:  The new party was called "Unionist", to differentiate it from both the Liberal and Conservative parties and therefore be able to appeal  all "good willing, freedom and democracy loving" men who "dreamed of the Central America Union".
Revised:  The new party was called "Unionist", to differentiate it from both the Liberal and Conservative parties and therefore be able to appeal to all "good willing, freedom and democracy loving" men who "dreamed of the Central America Union".
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Original:  The new party was called "Unionist", to differentiate it from both the Liberal and Conservative parties and therefore be able to appeal  all "good willing, freedom and democracy loving" men who "dreamed of the Central America Union".
Revised:  The new party was called "Unionist", to differentiate it from both the Liberal and Conservative parties and therefore be able to appeal all "good willing, freedom and democracy loving" men who "dreamed of the Central American Union".
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Original:  Tácito Molina wrote a founding Act for the party, which was signed by fifty one citizens on 25 December 1919 and was later known as the "Three-fold Act" because it had to be folded in three when it was distributed to the citizens of the city.
Revised:  Tácito Molina wrote a founding declaration for the party, which was signed by fifty one citizens on 25 December 1919 and was later known as the "Three-fold Act" because it had to be folded in three when it was distributed to the citizens of the city.
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Original:  Estrada Cabrera was forced to accept the new party due to the internal and international pressure.
Revised:  Estrada Cabrera was forced to accept the new party due to internal and international pressure.
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Original:  Since then, Estrada Cabrera publicly admitted his willingness to accept the international opinion on opening spaces for political rivals, but kept arresting Unionist sympathizers.
Revised:  Since then, Estrada Cabrera publicly admitted his willingness to bow to international opinion on opening spaces for political rivals, but kept arresting Unionist sympathizers.
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Original:  Ever since January, the Unionists had been taking a more threatening attitude  openly challenging the Government;
Revised:  Ever since January, the Unionists had been taking a more threatening attitude - openly challenging the Government;
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Original:  they had also been annoyed and imprisoned, but they were treated with less severity than had been the case with former similar attempts .
Revised:  they had also been harassed and imprisoned, but they were treated with less severity than had been the case with former similar attempts .
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Original:  they had also been annoyed and imprisoned, but they were treated with less severity than had been the case with former similar attempts .
Revised:  they had also been annoyed and imprisoned, but they were treated with less severity than had been previous challengers .
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Original:  It was whispered, however, that in case of need , the whole country would side with the Unionists.
Revised:  It was whispered, however, that if necessary , the whole country would side with the Unionists.
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Original:  On 11 March 1920, the new party organized a large demonstration against the government, partly demanding a new government, revision of the laws, administrative reforms, political freedom, and the abolition of the press censorship.
Revised:  On 11 March 1920, the new party organized a large demonstration against the government, demanding a new government, revision of the laws, administrative reforms, political freedom, and the abolition of the press censorship.
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Original:  On 11 March 1920, the new party organized a large demonstration against the government, partly demanding a new government, revision of the laws, administrative reforms, political freedom, and the abolition of the press censorship.
Revised:  On 11 March 1920, the new party organized a large demonstration against the government, partly demanding a new government, revision of the laws, administrative reforms, political freedom, and the abolition of press censorship.
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Original:  The National Assembly leaders promised to receive them, but when the procession - numbering several thousands - arrived at the Military Academy, where the National Assembly had moved after the 1917-18 earthquakes, the army fired their machine guns against it  leaving scores of dead and wounded on the ground.
Revised:  The National Assembly leaders promised to receive them, but when the procession - numbering several thousand - arrived at the Military Academy, where the National Assembly had moved after the 1917-18 earthquakes, the army fired their machine guns against it leaving scores of dead and wounded on the ground.
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Original:  The National Assembly leaders promised to receive them, but when the procession - numbering several thousands - arrived at the Military Academy, where the National Assembly had moved after the 1917-18 earthquakes, the army fired their machine guns against it  leaving scores of dead and wounded on the ground.
Revised:  The National Assembly leaders promised to receive them, but when the procession - numbering several thousands - arrived at the Military Academy, where the National Assembly had moved after the 1917-18 earthquakes, the army fired their machine guns against it , leaving scores of dead and wounded on the ground.
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Original:  This caused a lot of resentment and anger and united the Guatemalan people against the President, who was already detested after two decades of strong ruling and, especially, his evident incompetence to lead a decent recovery after the 1917-18 earthquakes.
Revised:  This caused a lot of resentment and anger and united the Guatemalan people against the President, who was already detested after two decades of strong-armed rule and, in particular, for his egregious incompetence to lead a decent recovery after the 1917-18 earthquakes.
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Original:  Prince Wilhelm and his companions returned to Guatemala City on April 8, 1920, and wrote on his book that "there was a sort of feeling in the air as of something was about to happen".
Revised:  Prince Wilhelm and his companions returned to Guatemala City on April 8, 1920, and he wrote in his book that "there was a sort of feeling in the air as of something was about to happen".
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Original:  Prince Wilhelm and his companions returned to Guatemala City on April 8, 1920, and wrote on his book that "there was a sort of feeling in the air as of something was about to happen".
Revised:  Prince Wilhelm and his companions returned to Guatemala City on April 8, 1920, and wrote on his book that "there was a sort of feeling in the air as though something was about to happen".
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Original:  The prince had no way to know that  the previous days Unionists leaders Julio Bianchi and Tácito Molina, among others, had struck a deal with Congress leaders , specially Adrian Vidaurre that on this day, the National Assembly would declare the president unfit for his high office.
Revised:  The prince had no way to know that in the previous days Unionists leaders Julio Bianchi and Tácito Molina, among others, had struck a deal with Congress leaders , specially Adrian Vidaurre that on this day, the National Assembly would declare the president unfit for his high office.
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Original:  The prince had no way to know that  the previous days Unionists leaders Julio Bianchi and Tácito Molina, among others, had struck a deal with Congress leaders , specially Adrian Vidaurre that on this day, the National Assembly would declare the president unfit for his high office.
Revised:  The prince had no way to know that the previous days Unionist leaders Julio Bianchi and Tácito Molina, among others, had struck a deal with Congress leaders , specially Adrian Vidaurre that on this day, the National Assembly would declare the president unfit for his high office.
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Original:  The prince had no way to know that  the previous days Unionists leaders Julio Bianchi and Tácito Molina, among others, had struck a deal with Congress leaders , specially Adrian Vidaurre that on this day, the National Assembly would declare the president unfit for his high office.
Revised:  The prince had no way to know that the previous days Unionists leaders Julio Bianchi and Tácito Molina, among others, had struck a deal with Congressional leaders - especially Adrian Vidaurre - that on this day, the National Assembly would declare the president unfit for his high office.
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Original:  The prince had no way to know that  the previous days Unionists leaders Julio Bianchi and Tácito Molina, among others, had struck a deal with Congress leaders , specially Adrian Vidaurre that on this day, the National Assembly would declare the president unfit for his high office.
Revised:  The prince had no way to know that the previous days Unionists leaders Julio Bianchi and Tácito Molina, among others, had struck a deal with Congress leaders , specially Adrian Vidaurre that on this day, the National Assembly would declare the President unfit for his high office.
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Original: Several attacks had been made on president Manuel Estrada Cabrera's life, but fortune had always been on his side .
Revised: Several attacks had been made on president Manuel Estrada Cabrera's life, but fortune had always favored him .
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Original:  This caused a lot of resentment and anger and united the Guatemalan people against the President, who was already detested after two decades of strong-armed rule and, in particular, for his egregious incompetence to lead a decent recovery after the 1917-18 earthquakes.
Revised:  This caused a lot of resentment and anger and united the Guatemalan people against the President, who was already detested after two decades of strong-armed rule and, in particular, for his egregious incompetence in leading the mrecovery after the 1917-18 earthquakes.
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Original:  Congress assembled in one of the public buildings of the city and requested that ten medical men should be deputed to go to "La Palma" and investigate;
Revised:  Congress assembled in one of the city’s public buildings and requested that ten medical men should be deputed to go to "La Palma" and investigate;
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Original:  Congress assembled in one of the public buildings of the city and requested that ten medical men should be deputed to go to "La Palma" and investigate;
Revised:  Congress assembled in one of the public buildings of the city and requested that ten medical men should be deputized to go to "La Palma" and investigate;
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Original:  the ten departed willingly enough, but being perfectly aware that their instructions would have been a death sentence, they stopped at a close corner, wait for a few hours and returned later to Congress with their decision: the president is insane, sure enough .
Revised:  the ten departed willingly enough, but being perfectly aware that following instructions would have been a death sentence, they stopped at a close corner, wait for a few hours and returned later to Congress with their decision: the president is insane, sure enough .
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Original:  the ten departed willingly enough, but being perfectly aware that their instructions would have been a death sentence, they stopped at a close corner, wait for a few hours and returned later to Congress with their decision: the president is insane, sure enough .
Revised:  the ten departed willingly enough, but being perfectly aware that their instructions would have been a death sentence, they stopped at a nearby corner, waited for a few hours and returned later to Congress with their decision: the president is insane, sure enough .
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Original:  the ten departed willingly enough, but being perfectly aware that their instructions would have been a death sentence, they stopped at a close corner, wait for a few hours and returned later to Congress with their decision: the president is insane, sure enough .
Revised:  the ten departed willingly enough, but being perfectly aware that their instructions would have been a death sentence, they stopped at a close corner, wait for a few hours and returned to Congress with their decision: the president is insane, sure enough .
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Original:  the ten departed willingly enough, but being perfectly aware that their instructions would have been a death sentence, they stopped at a close corner, wait for a few hours and returned later to Congress with their decision: the president is insane, sure enough .
Revised:  the ten departed willingly enough, but being perfectly aware that their instructions would have been a death sentence, they stopped at a close corner, wait for a few hours and returned later to Congress with their decision: the president is most certainly insane .
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Original:  Then, congress President Adrián Vidaurre, former Secretary of War and up to that point one of the most important members of Cabrera's cabinet, declared the President insane and unable to continue and designated citizen Carlos Herrera as interim president.
Revised:  Then, President of Congress, Adrián Vidaurre, former Secretary of War and up to that point one of the most important members of Cabrera's cabinet, declared the President insane and unable to continue and designated citizen Carlos Herrera as interim president.
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Original:  Then, congress President Adrián Vidaurre, former Secretary of War and up to that point one of the most important members of Cabrera's cabinet, declared the President insane and unable to continue and designated citizen Carlos Herrera as interim president.
Revised:  Then, congress President Adrián Vidaurre, former Secretary of War and up to that point one of the most important members of Cabrera's cabinet, declared the President insane and unable to continue . He designated Carlos Herrera as interim president.
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Original:  Herrera, then a representative from his hometown Santa Lucía Cotzumalguapa, had been elected partly on account of his good repute, partly because of his distinguished personal qualities and his great wealth, which should have rended him less likely to enrich himself at others' expense.
Revised:  Herrera, then a representative from his hometown Santa Lucía Cotzumalguapa, had been elected on account of his good repute, partly because of his distinguished personal qualities and his great wealth, which should have rended him less likely to enrich himself at others' expense.
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Original:  Herrera, then a representative from his hometown Santa Lucía Cotzumalguapa, had been elected partly on account of his good repute, partly because of his distinguished personal qualities and his great wealth, which should have rended him less likely to enrich himself at others' expense.
Revised:  Herrera, then a representative from his hometown Santa Lucía Cotzumalguapa, had been elected partly on account of his good repute, his distinguished personal qualities and his great wealth, which should have rended him less likely to enrich himself at others' expense.
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Original:  Herrera, then a representative from his hometown Santa Lucía Cotzumalguapa, had been elected partly on account of his good repute, partly because of his distinguished personal qualities and his great wealth, which should have rended him less likely to enrich himself at others' expense.
Revised:  Herrera, then a representative from his hometown Santa Lucía Cotzumalguapa, had been elected partly on account of his good repute, partly because of his distinguished personal qualities and his great wealth, on the assumption that it would have rendered him less likely to enrich himself at others' expense.
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Original:  Soon, great bodies of people were marching through the streets , shouting and waiving hands and congratulating each other . Cars and other vehicles  drove back an forth , packed with people and some people procured tin cans and  toy trumpets to add to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
Revised:  Soon, great masses of people were marching through the streets , shouting and waiving hands and congratulating each other . Cars and other vehicles drove back an forth , packed with people and some people procured tin cans and toy trumpets to add to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
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Original:  Soon, great bodies of people were marching through the streets , shouting and waiving hands and congratulating each other . Cars and other vehicles  drove back an forth , packed with people and some people procured tin cans and  toy trumpets to add to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
Revised:  Soon, great bodies of people were marching through the streets shouting and waving and congratulating one another . Cars and other vehicles drove back an forth , packed with people and some people procured tin cans and toy trumpets to add to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
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Original:  Soon, great bodies of people were marching through the streets , shouting and waiving hands and congratulating each other . Cars and other vehicles  drove back an forth , packed with people and some people procured tin cans and  toy trumpets to add to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
Revised:  Soon, great bodies of people were marching through the streets , shouting and waiving hands and congratulating each other . Cars and other vehicles drove back an forth . Some added the clatter of tin cans and toy trumpets to add to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
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Original:  Soon, great bodies of people were marching through the streets , shouting and waiving hands and congratulating each other . Cars and other vehicles  drove back an forth , packed with people and some people procured tin cans and  toy trumpets to add to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
Revised:  Soon, great bodies of people were marching through the streets , shouting and waiving hands and congratulating each other . Cars and other vehicles drove back an forth , packed with people and some people procured tin cans and braying of toy trumpets to add to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
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Original:  Soon, great bodies of people were marching through the streets , shouting and waiving hands and congratulating each other . Cars and other vehicles  drove back an forth , packed with people and some people procured tin cans and  toy trumpets to add to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
Revised:  Soon, great bodies of people were marching through the streets , shouting and waiving hands and congratulating each other . Cars and other vehicles drove back an forth , packed with people and some people procured tin cans and toy trumpets to the noise, while in government buildings and barracks the soldiers simply looked on.
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Original:  Most of the soldiers had been bought over and had promised to remain neutral until they knew better .
Revised:  Most of the soldiers had been bought off and had promised to remain neutral until they knew better .
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Original:  Most of the soldiers had been bought over and had promised to remain neutral until they knew better .
Revised:  Most of the soldiers had been bought over and had promised to remain neutral until the dust settled .
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Original:  upon learning the news , he simply said: "Loco, ¿eh? ¡Ya verán su loco!" -"Mad, huh?
Revised:  upon learning of his diagnosis , he simply said: "Loco, ¿eh? ¡Ya verán su loco!" -"Mad, huh?
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Original:  Cabrera resisted this designation and settled for a fight from his residence in "La Palma", which was a large enclosed area with roads crossing both ways, without any real aspect of park or garden arrangement.
Revised:  Cabrera resisted this designation and settled for a fight from his residence in "La Palma", which was a large enclosed area with roads crossing both ways, without civilizing aspects such as a park or garden arrangement.
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Original:  Tumbled together in a group were some small buildings , painted in the crudest  colors;
Revised:  Tumbled together in a group were some small buildings , painted in the crudest of colors;
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Original:  each house appeared to be built for some particular purpose: one was the dining room, another the kitchen, a writing room, and so on.
Revised:  each house appeared to have been built for a particular purpose: one was the dining room, another the kitchen, a writing room, and so on.
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Original:  The structure had little open spaces, was blazed in the sun and had wonderful landscapes painted on the walls.
Revised:  The sun beat down on the barren compound, which had little open spaces, was blazed in the sun and had wonderful landscapes painted on the walls.
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Original:  The structure had little open spaces, was blazed in the sun and had wonderful landscapes painted on the walls.
Revised:  The structure had little open space, but had wonderful landscapes painted on the walls.
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Original:  At a little distance were straw-thatched huts with a lone broad bench used for bed and table for servants and soldiers  .
Revised:  At a little distance were thatched huts with a lone broad bench used for bed and table for servants and soldiers .
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Original:  At a little distance were straw-thatched huts with a lone broad bench used for bed and table for servants and soldiers  .
Revised:  At a little distance were straw-thatched huts with a lone broad bench that servants and soldiers .
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Original:  On April 9, 1920, Guatemala City was awakened with machine-gun fire and shells dropping close in every quarter of the city.
Revised:  On April 9, 1920, Guatemala City was awakened with machine-gun fire and shelling in every quarter of the city.
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