wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Pyaar Vali Love Story (2014) Lokmanya ek yugpurush (2015) Classmates (2015  ) Balkadu (2015) Ektara (2015) Sandook (2015) Welcome Zindagi (2015) Murder Mestri (2015) Dhol Taashe (2015) Carry On Maratha (2015) Tu Hi Re (2015) Partu (2015) Natsamrat (2015) Ganvesh (2016) Poster Girl (2016)  Bhikari (2017) Bandukya (2017) Mala Kahich Problem Nahi (2017) shentimental (2017) Deva (2017) barayan (2018) Ghuma (2018) Amhi Doghi (2018) Hostel days (2018) Ranangan (2018) Redu (2018) Ani...
Revised:  Pyaar Vali Love Story (2014) Lokmanya ek yugpurush (2015) Classmates (2015 ) Balkadu (2015) Ektara (2015) Sandook (2015) Welcome Zindagi (2015) Murder Mestri (2015) Dhol Taashe (2015) Carry On Maratha (2015) Tu Hi Re (2015) Partu (2015) Natsamrat (2015) Ganvesh (2016) Poster Girl (2016) Mr. And mrs. Sadachari (2016) Bhikari (2017) Bandukya (2017) Mala Kahich Problem Nahi (2017) shentimental (2017) Deva (2017) barayan (2018) Ghuma (2018) Amhi Doghi (2018) Hostel days (2018) Ranangan (2018) Redu (2018) Ani...
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Original:  Pyaar Vali Love Story (2014) Lokmanya ek yugpurush (2015) Classmates (2015  ) Balkadu (2015) Ektara (2015) Sandook (2015) Welcome Zindagi (2015) Murder Mestri (2015) Dhol Taashe (2015) Carry On Maratha (2015) Tu Hi Re (2015) Partu (2015) Natsamrat (2015) Ganvesh (2016) Poster Girl (2016)  Bhikari (2017) Bandukya (2017) Mala Kahich Problem Nahi (2017) shentimental (2017) Deva (2017) barayan (2018) Ghuma (2018) Amhi Doghi (2018) Hostel days (2018) Ranangan (2018) Redu (2018) Ani...
Revised:  Pyaar Vali Love Story (2014) Lokmanya ek yugpurush (2015) Classmates (2015 ) Balkadu (2015) Ektara (2015) Sandook (2015) Welcome Zindagi (2015) Murder Mestri (2015) Dhol Taashe (2015) Carry On Maratha (2015) Tu Hi Re (2015) Partu (2015) Natsamrat (2015) Ganvesh (2016) Poster Girl (2016) Bhikari (2017) Bandukya (2017) Mala Kahich Problem Nahi (2017) Shentimental (2017) Deva (2017) barayan (2018) Ghuma (2018) Amhi Doghi (2018) Hostel days (2018) Ranangan (2018) Redu (2018) Ani...
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Original:  Pyaar Vali Love Story (2014) Lokmanya ek yugpurush (2015) Classmates (2015  ) Balkadu (2015) Ektara (2015) Sandook (2015) Welcome Zindagi (2015) Murder Mestri (2015) Dhol Taashe (2015) Carry On Maratha (2015) Tu Hi Re (2015) Partu (2015) Natsamrat (2015) Ganvesh (2016) Poster Girl (2016)  Bhikari (2017) Bandukya (2017) Mala Kahich Problem Nahi (2017) shentimental (2017) Deva (2017) barayan (2018) Ghuma (2018) Amhi Doghi (2018) Hostel days (2018) Ranangan (2018) Redu (2018) Ani...
Revised:  Pyaar Vali Love Story (2014) Lokmanya ek yugpurush (2015) Classmates (2015 ) Balkadu (2015) Ektara (2015) Sandook (2015) Welcome Zindagi (2015) Murder Mestri (2015) Dhol Taashe (2015) Carry On Maratha (2015) Tu Hi Re (2015) Partu (2015) Natsamrat (2015) Ganvesh (2016) Poster Girl (2016) Bhikari (2017) Bandukya (2017) Mala Kahich Problem Nahi (2017) shentimental (2017) Deva (2017) Barayan (2018) Ghuma (2018) Amhi Doghi (2018) Hostel days (2018) Ranangan (2018) Redu (2018) Ani...
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Original:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar, Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M)  
Revised:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar, Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) | 31 || Indradhanu || Ajit Parab || Sharayu Date || 
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Original:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar, Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M)  
Revised:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar, Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) Ani... Dr. Kashinath Ghanekar
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Original:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar, Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) | 31 || Indradhanu || Ajit Parab || Sharayu Date || Ani...
Revised:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar, Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) 31 || Indradhanu || Ajit Parab || Sharayu Date || Ani...
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Original:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar, Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) | 31 || Indradhanu || Ajit Parab || Sharayu Date || Ani...
Revised:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar, Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) | 31 Indradhanu Ajit Parab Sharayu Date Ani...
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Original:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar,Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) 31 Indradhanu Ajit Parab Sharayu Date Ani...
Revised:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Mahesh Swapnil Bandhodkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) 31 Indradhanu Ajit Parab Sharayu Date Ani...
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Original:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar,Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Reshma Sonavane, Manohar Kolambre Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) 31 Indradhanu Ajit Parab Sharayu Date Ani...
Revised:  26 Dav ishkacha ardhyat raya Ajit samir urmila dhangar Fakt ladh mhana (M) 27 yo yo go maze baay Ajit-samir Sachin pilgaonkar ticha baap tyacha baap (M) 28 Akherache He Gane Achyut Thakur Shaunak Abhisheki Marmabandha (M) 29 Mala ved lagle Chinar Khakar Swapnil Bandodkar,Mahalaxmi Iyer, Chinar Kharkar, Ketaki Mategaokar, Bela Shende Timepass (M) 30 Mauli Mauli Ajay-Atul Ajay Gogavale Lai Bhaari (M) 31 Indradhanu Ajit Parab Sharayu Date Ani...
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Original:  In particular, the concept was applied to Central Europe around the end of the 16th century till  start of the early 19th century in numerous sources.
Revised:  In particular, the concept was applied to Central Europe around the end of the 16th century till the start of the early 19th century in numerous sources.
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Original:  Besides the Tragedy of the commons legend, the alleged Holznot was critical to motivate the shift from forest use as part of Subsistence agriculture to modern professional forestry and was an important base of the development of modern forestry science around 1800.
Revised:  Besides the tragedy of the commons legend, the alleged Holznot was critical to motivate the shift from forest use as part of Subsistence agriculture to modern professional forestry and was an important base of the development of modern forestry science around 1800.
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Original:  Besides the Tragedy of the commons legend, the alleged Holznot was critical to motivate the shift from forest use as part of Subsistence agriculture to modern professional forestry and was an important base of the development of modern forestry science around 1800.
Revised:  Besides the Tragedy of the commons legend, the alleged Holznot was critical to motivate the shift from forest use as part of subsistence agriculture to modern professional forestry and was an important base of the development of modern forestry science around 1800.
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Original:  Around the 1980s, Environmental Historian Joachim Radkau raising doubts about the alleged eighteenth-century wood shortage started a research controversy among German historians, called the "Holznotdebatte".
Revised:  Around the 1980s, environmental historian Joachim Radkau raising doubts about the alleged eighteenth-century wood shortage started a research controversy among German historians, called the "Holznotdebatte".
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Original:  Around the 1980s, Environmental Historian Joachim Radkau raising doubts about the alleged eighteenth-century wood shortage started a research controversy among German historians, called the "Holznotdebatte".
Revised:  Around the 1980s, Environmental Historian Joachim Radkau raising doubts about the alleged 18th-century wood shortage started a research controversy among German historians, called the "Holznotdebatte".
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Original:  Similar as with the tragedy of the commons he saw a strong ideological motiv to get rid of the traditional farmers  forest access.
Revised:  Similar as with the tragedy of the commons he saw a strong ideological motive to get rid of the traditional farmers forest access.
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Original:  Similar as with the tragedy of the commons he saw a strong ideological motiv to get rid of the traditional farmers  forest access.
Revised:  Similar as with the tragedy of the commons he saw a strong ideological motiv to get rid of the traditional farmers ' forest access.
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Original:  Radkau repeats Werner Sombart’s notion of the preindustrial phase as a “Wooden Age”, where wood constituted the key substance for fuel energy, construction and machinery.
Revised:  Radkau repeats Werner Sombart’s notion of the pre-industrial phase as a “Wooden Age”, where wood constituted the key substance for fuel energy, construction and machinery.
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Original:  However the situation began to change in the 16. century, as meeting point of the capitalist expansion and the formation of the absolutist state.
Revised:  However the situation began to change in the 16th century, as meeting point of the capitalist expansion and the formation of the absolutist state.
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Original:  From the sixteenth century world maritime trade, housing construction in Europe and the mountain mining industry brought a sharp rise in timber consumption.
Revised:  From the 16th century, world maritime trade, housing construction in Europe and the mountain mining industry brought a sharp rise in timber consumption.
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Original:  Complaints about wood shortages served according Radkau to legitimate state intervention and to exclude of traditional groups of users, as Resin workers and Wood pasture in favour of more profitable timber consumers.
Revised:  Complaints about wood shortages served according Radkau to legitimate state intervention and to exclude of traditional groups of users, as resin workers and wood pasture in favour of more profitable timber consumers.
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Original:  Peak wood Sometimes the term Peak wood as the point in time when the maximum rate of wood harvesting is reached is being used.
Revised:  Peak wood Sometimes the term peak wood as the point in time when the maximum rate of wood harvesting is reached is being used.
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Original:  Its relevance for ancient und current times is however disputed strongly.
Revised:  Its relevance for ancient and current times is however disputed strongly.
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Original:  By Joachim Radkau, translated by Patrick Camiller (Cambridge, UK: Polity Press, 2012. viii plus 399 pp.) Swiss Bafu research Project «Holznot» ( 18. / 19. century) Rolf-Jürgen Gleitsmann: Rohstoffmangel und Lösungsstrategien: Das Problem der vorindustriellen Holzknappheit, in: Technologie und Politik 16 (1980), S. 104-154.
Revised:  By Joachim Radkau, translated by Patrick Camiller (Cambridge, UK: Polity Press, 2012. viii plus 399 pp.) Swiss Bafu research Project «Holznot» ( 18th / 19. century) Rolf-Jürgen Gleitsmann: Rohstoffmangel und Lösungsstrategien: Das Problem der vorindustriellen Holzknappheit, in: Technologie und Politik 16 (1980), S. 104-154.
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Original:  By Joachim Radkau, translated by Patrick Camiller (Cambridge, UK: Polity Press, 2012. viii plus 399 pp.) Swiss Bafu research Project «Holznot» ( 18. / 19. century) Rolf-Jürgen Gleitsmann: Rohstoffmangel und Lösungsstrategien: Das Problem der vorindustriellen Holzknappheit, in: Technologie und Politik 16 (1980), S. 104-154.
Revised:  By Joachim Radkau, translated by Patrick Camiller (Cambridge, UK: Polity Press, 2012. viii plus 399 pp.) Swiss Bafu research Project «Holznot» ( 18. / 19th century) Rolf-Jürgen Gleitsmann: Rohstoffmangel und Lösungsstrategien: Das Problem der vorindustriellen Holzknappheit, in: Technologie und Politik 16 (1980), S. 104-154.
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Original: Peak wood Sometimes the term peak wood as the point in time when the maximum rate of wood harvesting is reached is being used .
Revised: Peak wood The term peak wood as the point in time when the maximum rate of wood harvesting is reached is being used .
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Original: Peak wood Sometimes the term peak wood as the point in time when the maximum rate of wood harvesting is reached is being used .
Revised: Peak wood Sometimes the term peak wood refers to the point in time when the maximum rate of wood harvesting is reached is being used .
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Original: Peak wood Sometimes the term peak wood as the point in time when the maximum rate of wood harvesting is reached is being used .
Revised: Peak wood Sometimes the term peak wood as the point in time when the maximum rate of wood harvesting is reached .
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Original: Radkau repeats Werner Sombart ’ s notion of the pre-industrial phase as a “Wooden Age” , where wood constituted the key substance for fuel energy, construction and machinery.
Revised: Radkau repeats Werner Sombart ' s notion of the pre-industrial phase as a “Wooden Age” , where wood constituted the key substance for fuel energy, construction and machinery.
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Original: Radkau repeats Werner Sombart ’ s notion of the pre-industrial phase as a “Wooden Age” , where wood constituted the key substance for fuel energy, construction and machinery.
Revised: Radkau repeats Werner Sombart ’ s notion of the pre-industrial phase as a "Wooden Age" , where wood constituted the key substance for fuel energy, construction and machinery.
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Original:  Holznot (German for wood shortage ) is a historic term for an existing or imminent supply crisis of wood.
Revised:  Holznot (German for wood crisis ) is a historic term for an existing or imminent supply crisis of wood.
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Original: Early life and education Hu's father was a Gansu ahong (imam) belonging to the Khafiya menhuan, a Chinese-style Naqshbandi Sufi order.
Revised: Buto buto education Hu's father was a Gansu ahong (imam) belonging to the Khafiya menhuan, a Chinese-style Naqshbandi Sufi order.
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Original:  So be it  . English translation by Jonathan N. Lipman from page 200 of Familiar Strangers: A History of Muslims in Northwest ChinaLipman translated it from page 319 of Ye Zhenggang's "Ningxia Yihewani zhuming jingxuejia Hu Songshan" (Hu Songshan, the famous scripturalist of the Ningxia Ikhwan)
Revised:  So be it /amen . English translation by Jonathan N. Lipman from page 200 of Familiar Strangers: A History of Muslims in Northwest ChinaLipman translated it from page 319 of Ye Zhenggang's "Ningxia Yihewani zhuming jingxuejia Hu Songshan" (Hu Songshan, the famous scripturalist of the Ningxia Ikhwan)
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Original: Life Hu Songshan went on Hajj to Mecca in 1924 at age 45, traveling through Shanghai and he reached Mecca in 1925.
Revised: Life He went on Hajj to Mecca in 1924 at age 45, traveling through Shanghai and he reached Mecca in 1925.
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Original:   Instead of advocating an Islamic state, he wanted Muslims to practice their religion in a strong China.
Revised:  Alt URL Instead of advocating an Islamic state, he wanted Muslims to practice their religion in a strong China.
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Original: Buto buto education Hu's father was a Gansu ahong (imam) belonging to the Khafiya menhuan, a Chinese-style Naqshbandi Sufi order.
Revised: Early life and education Hu's father was a Gansu ahong (imam) belonging to the Khafiya menhuan, a Chinese-style Naqshbandi Sufi order.
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Original:  Boston University Case Western Reserve University Columbia University Children's National Medical Center Emory University (partnering with Morehouse School of Medicine and Georgia Institute of Technology  ) Duke University Georgetown University with Howard University Harvard University Indiana University School of Medicine (partnering with Purdue University and University of Notre Dame)
Revised:  Boston University Case Western Reserve University Columbia University Children's National Medical Center Emory University (partnering with Morehouse School of Medicine , Georgia Institute of Technology ) Duke University Georgetown University with Howard University Harvard University Indiana University School of Medicine (partnering with Purdue University and University of Notre Dame)
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Original: The Agadir Crisis, Agadir Incident or Second Moroccan Crisis (also known as the Panthersprung in German) was a brief international crisis sparked by the deployment of a substantial force of French troops in the interior of Morocco in April 1911 and the deployment of a German gunboat to the Agadir, a Moroccan Atlantic port.
Revised: The Agadir Crisis, Agadir Incident or Second Moroccan Crisis (also known as the Panthersprung in German) was a brief crisis sparked by the deployment of a substantial force of French troops in the interior of Morocco in April 1911 and the deployment of a German gunboat to the Agadir, a Moroccan Atlantic port.
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Original:  On 5 June, the Spanish deployed troops to occupyLarache and Alcazarquivir, fearing a French annexation of the country.
Revised:  On 5 June, the Spanish deployed troops to occupy Larache and Alcazarquivir, fearing a French annexation of the country.
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Original: Quoted in M.L. Dockrill, British Policy During the Agadir Crisis of 1911 from F.H. Hinsley, British Foreign Policy Under Sir Edward Grey (Cambridge, 1977), p .271.
Revised: Quoted in M.L. Dockrill, British Policy During the Agadir Crisis of 1911 from F.H. Hinsley, British Foreign Policy Under Sir Edward Grey (Cambridge, 1977), p . 271.
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Original: On 4 November, secret Franco-German negotiations between Calliaux and  led to a convention referred to as the Franco-German Accord, under which Germany accepted France's position in Morocco in return for territory in the French Equatorial African colony of Middle Congo (now the Republic of the Congo), as outlined in the Morocco-Congo Treaty.
Revised: On 4 November, secret Franco-German negotiations between Calliaux and the Germans led to a convention referred to as the Franco-German Accord, under which Germany accepted France's position in Morocco in return for territory in the French Equatorial African colony of Middle Congo (now the Republic of the Congo), as outlined in the Morocco-Congo Treaty.
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Original: 300px|The public hanging of various involucra ted officials Between 1965 and 1977 over 100 murders occurred in Maryland County by Harper, many of which were killed in ritualistic ways due to the mutilation and removal of body parts.
Revised: 300px|The public hanging of various involucrated officials Between 1965 and 1977 over 100 murders occurred in Maryland County by Harper, many of which were killed in ritualistic ways due to the mutilation and removal of body parts.
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Original: 300px|The public hanging of various involucrated officials Between 1965 and 1977 over 100 murders occurred  in Maryland County by Harper , many of which were killed in ritualistic ways due to the mutilation and removal of body parts.
Revised: 300px|The public hanging of various involucrated officials Between 1965 and 1977 over 100 murders occurred in Maryland County , many of which were killed in ritualistic ways due to the mutilation and removal of body parts.
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Original: 300px|The public hanging of various involucrated officials Between 1965 and 1977 over 100 murders occurred  in Maryland County by Harper , many of which were killed in ritualistic ways due to the mutilation and removal of body parts.
Revised: 300px|The public hanging of various involucrated officials Between 1965 and 1977 over 100 murders occurred in Maryland County by Harper , many of which involved mutilation and the removal of body parts.
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Original:  Between November 1976 and July 1977  14 people had disappeared in the county prompting Tolbert to fire the Superintendent of Maryland County, James Daniel Anderson, for failure to report the missing people and publicly declare "Anyone who kills deliberately: The law will kill that person"  .
Revised:  Between November 1976 and July 1977 , 14 people had disappeared in the county prompting Tolbert to fire the Superintendent of Maryland County, James Daniel Anderson, for failure to report the missing people and publicly declare "Anyone who kills deliberately: The law will kill that person" .
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Original:  His second grandson Milan O-Williams is currently under the influence of marijuana with Sanzhar Mergaliyev (2002 - ∞ ) and Ali (2001 - 2002).
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Original:  On April 14  about 2,000 activists began what was planned as a peaceful march on the Executive Mansion.
Revised:  On 14 about 2,000 activists began what was planned as a peaceful march on the Executive Mansion.
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