wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Tomb of the King of Boni , built in the early 15th century, is the tomb of Manarejiana (), ruler of Boni, a medieval state on the island of Borneo , considered by some as the predecessor of the present-day sultanate of Bruneibut disputed by some researchers.
Revised:  Tomb of the King of Boni is the tomb of Manarejiana (), ruler of Boni, a medieval state on the island of Borneo , considered by some as the predecessor of the present-day sultanate of Bruneibut disputed by some researchers.
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Original:  Tomb of the King of Boni , built in the early 15th century, is the tomb of Manarejiana (), ruler of Boni, a medieval state on the island of Borneo , considered by some as the predecessor of the present-day sultanate of Bruneibut disputed by some researchers.
Revised:  Tomb of the King of Boni , built in the early 15th century, is the tomb of Manarejiana (), ruler of Boni, a medieval state on the island of Borneo sometimes considered to be the predecessor of the present-day sultanate of Bruneibut disputed by some researchers.
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Original:  As one of the only two foreign rulers' tombs in China (the other one being the Tomb of the King of Sulu in Dezhou, Shandong) , Furthermore, there is a cenotaph of King Taksin of Siam in Chenghai, Guangdong province. it is an important heritage site under state protection.
Revised:  As one of the only two foreign rulers' tombs in China (the other one being the Tomb of the King of Sulu in Dezhou, Shandong) . Furthermore, there is a cenotaph of King Taksin of Siam in Chenghai, Guangdong province. it is an important heritage site under state protection.
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Original:  In the third year of the Hongwu reign, Ming dynasty (1370), the emperor Zhu Yuanzhang dispatched Censor Zhang Jingzhi and Fujian official Shen Zhi to Boni on a diplomatic mission.
Revised:  In the third year of the Hongwu reign, Ming dynasty (1370), the emperor Zhu Yuanzhang dispatched imperial censor Zhang Jingzhi and Fujian official Shen Zhi to Boni on a diplomatic mission.
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Original:  In the winter of the third year of the Yongle reign (1405), the King of Boni, (who ascended the throne in 1402 ) sent his envoys to bring tribute to the Yongle Emperor .
Revised:  In the winter of the third year of the Yongle reign (1405), the King of Boni, (who ascended the throne in 1402 , and sent his envoys to bring tribute to the Yongle Emperor .
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Original:  In the winter of the third year of the Yongle reign (1405), the King of Boni, (who ascended the throne in 1402 ) sent his envoys to bring tribute to the Yongle Emperor .
Revised:  In the winter of the third year of the Yongle reign (1405), the King of Boni, (who ascended the throne in 1402 ) sent his envoys to bring tribute to the Yongle Emperor in 1405.
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Original:  He fell ill after he had stayed in Nanjing for over a month.
Revised:  He fell ill after staying in Nanjing for over a month.
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Original:  He was 28 years old when he died in his residence in the tenth lunar month of that very year.
Revised:  He was 28 years old when he died in his residence in the tenth lunar month of that year.
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Original:  Abandonment and rediscovery Later on , the tomb was deserted and abandoned in the forest, thus gained a name of “Huihuifen” (literally the tomb of the Hui people) from the local residents.
Revised:  Abandonment and rediscovery Later , the tomb was deserted and abandoned in the forest, thus gained a name of “Huihuifen” (literally the tomb of the Hui people) from the local residents.
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Original: Dr. Gerhardus Petrus Christiaan de Kock better known as Gerhard de Kock (14 February 1926 — 7 August 1989) was the sixth Governor of the South African Reserve Bank.
Revised: Dr. Gerhardus Petrus Christiaan de Kock better known as Gerhard de Kock (14 February 1926 – 7 August 1989) was the sixth Governor of the South African Reserve Bank.
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Original: On his return to South Africa Dr de Kock was appointed as a Deputy Governor of the Reserve Bank with effect from 1 July 1971 and then to Senior Deputy Governor on 1 July 1976.
Revised: On his return to South Africa , Dr. de Kock was appointed as a Deputy Governor of the Reserve Bank with effect from 1 July 1971 and then to Senior Deputy Governor on 1 July 1976.
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Original:  In 1977 Dr  De Kock was seconded to the Ministry of Finance as a Special Economic Adviser.
Revised:  In 1977 Dr . De Kock was seconded to the Ministry of Finance as a Special Economic Adviser.
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Original:  The final phase in Dr  De Kock’s career began when he succeeded Dr T W de Jongh as Reserve Bank Governor, a position he held until his death in August 1989.
Revised:  The final phase in Dr . De Kock’s career began when he succeeded Dr T W de Jongh as Reserve Bank Governor, a position he held until his death in August 1989.
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Original:  The final phase in Dr  De Kock’s career began when he succeeded Dr T W de Jongh as Reserve Bank Governor, a position he held until his death in August 1989.
Revised:  The final phase in Dr De Kock’s career began when he succeeded Dr . T. W. de Jongh as Reserve Bank Governor, a position he held until his death in August 1989.
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Original:  Dr  de Kock also served as a Director and later as Chairman of the National Finance Corporation and its “successor” the Corporation for Public Deposits.
Revised:  Dr . de Kock also served as a Director and later as Chairman of the National Finance Corporation and its “successor” the Corporation for Public Deposits.
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Original:  Honorary doctorates and awards received / bestowed on Dr de Kock include the following: 1982 -
Revised:  Honorary doctorates and awards received / bestowed on Dr de Kock included the following: 1982 -
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Original: Dr. Christian Lodewyk Stals (born 13 March URL was the seventh Governor of the South African Reserve Bank, serving from 8 August 1989 to 7 August 1999.
Revised: Dr. Christian Lodewyk Stals (born 13 March 1935) was the seventh Governor of the South African Reserve Bank, serving from 8 August 1989 to 7 August 1999.
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Original:  He succeeded Dr. G.P de Kock who had died in office.
Revised:  He succeeded Dr. Gerhard de Kock who had died in office.
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Original:  Across multiple facets of health which include cognitive, physical, and sensory functioning, the elderly' s ability to maintain their everyday routine and lifestyle is being challenged.
Revised:  Across multiple facets of health which include cognitive, physical, and sensory functioning, older adults' ability to maintain their everyday routine and lifestyle is being challenged.
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Original:  but rather reflect developmental adaptations that assist with one's adjustment to daily experiences, based on lifespan theory . Mainly the debate in this area revolves around whether the health consequences of old age can be linked to changes in traits , which would suggest that personality is not changing, but rather the abilities of an individual is hindering their behavior .
Revised:  but rather reflect developmental adaptations that assist with one's adjustment to daily experiences, based on lifespan theory . Mainly the debate in this area revolves around whether the health consequences of old age can be linked to changes in traits and whether these changes can, in turn, impair health and functioning .
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Original: Personality is the makeup of an individuals thinking, feeling , and behavior and is bound to change over the period of a lifetime .
Revised: Personality refers to individual differences in characteristic patterns of thinking, feeling , and behavior and is bound to change over the period of a lifetime .
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Original: Personality is the makeup of an individuals thinking, feeling , and behavior and is bound to change over the period of a lifetime .
Revised: Personality is the makeup of an individuals thinking, feeling and behaving .
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Original:  For them, the discrepancies observed across one's behaviors were evidence that interindividual differences did not exist Mischel, W. (1968).
Revised:  For them, the discrepancies observed across one's behaviors were evidence that inter-individual differences did not exist Mischel, W. (1968).
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Original:  Some aspects of the situationist perspective even suggest that all human beings are the same and that the differences we observe are simply illusory biproducts of the environment.
Revised:  Some aspects of the situationist perspective even suggest that all human beings are the same and that the differences we observe are simply illusory byproducts of the environment.
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Original:  However, personologists soon integrated these inconsistencies into their conceptualization of personality.
Revised:  However, personality experts (sometimes referred to personologists) soon integrated these inconsistencies into their conceptualization of personality.
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Original:  It has long been believed that personality development is shaped by life experiences that intensify the propensities that led individuals to those experiences in the first place, which is known as the corresponsive principle .
Revised:  It has long been believed that personality development is shaped by life experiences that intensify the propensities that led individuals to those experiences in the first place, which is known as the Correspondence Principle .
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Original:  Hence  inconsistency is quantifiable much like a trait  and constitutes an index of and enhances the fit of psychological models.
Revised:  Hence , inconsistency is quantifiable much like a trait and constitutes an index of and enhances the fit of psychological models.
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Original:  Hence  inconsistency is quantifiable much like a trait  and constitutes an index of and enhances the fit of psychological models.
Revised:  Hence inconsistency is quantifiable much like a trait , and constitutes an index of and enhances the fit of psychological models.
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Original:  Hence  inconsistency is quantifiable much like a trait  and constitutes an index of and enhances the fit of psychological models.
Revised:  Hence inconsistency is quantifiable much like a trait and constitutes an index of - and enhances - the fit of psychological models.
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Original:  There appears to be no point during the lifespan that neuroticism is immutable, which is known as the plasticity principle .
Revised:  There appears to be no point during the lifespan that neuroticism is immutable, which is known as the Plasticity Principle .
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Original:  For example, openness to values decreases substantially with age, while openness to aesthetics is more stable.
Revised:  For example, openness with values decreases substantially with age, while openness to aesthetics is more stable.
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Original:  For example, openness to values decreases substantially with age, while openness to aesthetics is more stable.
Revised:  For example, openness to values decreases substantially with age, while openness with aesthetics is more stable.
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Original: However, personality experts (sometimes referred to  personologists) soon integrated these inconsistencies into their conceptualization of personality.
Revised: However, personality experts (sometimes referred to as personologists) soon integrated these inconsistencies into their conceptualization of personality.
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Original:   ]  Agreeableness also drops from late childhood to adolescence, but then picks back up from adolescence into adulthood.
Revised:  is] Agreeableness also drops from late childhood to adolescence, but then picks back up from adolescence into adulthood.
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Original:  Similar trends seem to exist in other countries  [  .
Revised:  Similar trends seem to exist in other countries . [ .
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Original:    Change over a lifetime There are two very specific types of change that researchers tend to focus on: rank-order change and mean-level change.
Revised:  Most people, in their lifetime, will experience an event that opens their eyes to a new understanding of the world. For example, someone who is carefree and happy might become more serious and stern after experiencing abuse in a relationship. Another who is serious and stern might become more happy and interested in life after finding a religion that provides them with closure and answered questions. Each day of life is met with events and situations that result in a response from those who experience them - and sometimes, these events can change who we are and how we think at the core. Change over a lifetime There are two very specific types of change that researchers tend to focus on: rank-order change and mean-level change.
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Original:    Change over a lifetime There are two very specific types of change that researchers tend to focus on: rank-order change and mean-level change.
Revised:  A study published in 2012 found that "personality does change and that the extent to which personality changes is comparable to other characteristics, such as income, unemployment and marital status". Some of the biggest concerns faced in life are the previously listed factors - how much money does one make (income)? Does one have a job or not (unemployment)? Does one have a lifelong companion (martial status)? These situations can lead to bigger, more complex situations. If one seeks to be married but is not, they may become cold. If one has no job but then gets hired somewhere, they may become grateful and filled with hope. When positive changes happen, "personality ... meaningfully predicts changes to life satisfaction". Simply, when one experiences a personality change, it can strongly determine how that person will then feel about life. Change over a lifetime There are two very specific types of change that researchers tend to focus on: rank-order change and mean-level change.
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Original: An easier way to understand or describe personality is simply to say that one's personality is made up of events, circumstances, as well as genetics, that come together in order to provide someone with defining characteristics and traits.
Revised: An easier way to understand or describe personality is simply to say : one's personality is made up of events, circumstances, as well as genetics, that come together in order to provide someone with defining characteristics and traits.
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Original: An easier way to understand or describe personality is simply to say that one's personality is made up of events, circumstances, as well as genetics, that come together in order to provide someone with defining characteristics and traits.
Revised: An easier way to understand or describe personality is simply to say that one's personality is made up of events, circumstances, and genetics, that come together in order to provide someone with defining characteristics and traits.
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Original: An easier way to understand or describe personality is simply to say that one's personality is made up of events, circumstances, as well as genetics, that come together in order to provide someone with defining characteristics and traits.
Revised: An easier way to understand or describe personality is simply to say that one's personality is made up of events, circumstances, as well as genetics, that come together to influence the development of defining characteristics and traits.
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Original:  Those traits and characteristics that define someone are what the general public like to describe as one's personality.
Revised:  Those traits and characteristics that define someone are what the general public like to describe as personality.
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Original: The International Force East Timor (INTERFET) was a multinational non-United Nations peacemaking task force, organized and led by Australia in accordance with United Nations resolutions to address the humanitarian and security crisis that took place in East Timor from 1999–2000 until the arrival of UN peacekeepers.
Revised: The International Force East Timor (INTERFET) was a multinational non-United Nations peacemaking task force, organised and led by Australia in accordance with United Nations resolutions to address the humanitarian and security crisis that took place in East Timor from 1999–2000 until the arrival of UN peacekeepers.
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Original:  Also in support was a significant airlift group, with Australian transport aircraft including thirteen C-130 Hercules and three DHC-4 Caribou , in addition to a number of New Zealand, British, United States, Canadian, French and Thai aircraft  .
Revised:  Also in support was a significant airlift group, with Australian transport aircraft including thirteen C-130 Hercules and three DHC-4 Caribou , in addition to a number of British, United States, Canadian, French and Thai aircraft .
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Original:  New Zealand deployed C-130 Hercules, Bell UH-1H Hueys, and A-4K Skyhawks were deployed to RAAF Base Tindal to support RAAF F-111’s .
Revised:  New Zealand deployed C-130 Hercules, Bell UH-1H Hueys, and A-4K Skyhawks to RAAF Base Tindal to support RAAF F-111’s .
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Original:  New Zealand deployed C-130 Hercules, Bell UH-1H Hueys, and A-4K Skyhawks were deployed to RAAF Base Tindal to support RAAF F-111’s .
Revised:  New Zealand deployed C-130 Hercules, Bell UH-1H Hueys, and A-4K Skyhawks were deployed to RAAF Base Tindal to support RAAF F-111s .
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Original: See also East Timor History of East Timor United Nations Transitional Administration in East Timor (UNTAET) United Nations Mission of Support to East Timor (UNMISET) Answered by Fire, a 2006 television drama concerning the crisis which led to the INTERFET mission.
Revised: See also History of East Timor United Nations Transitional Administration in East Timor (UNTAET) United Nations Mission of Support to East Timor (UNMISET) Answered by Fire, a 2006 television drama concerning the crisis which led to the INTERFET mission.
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Original: See also East Timor History of East Timor United Nations Transitional Administration in East Timor (UNTAET) United Nations Mission of Support to East Timor (UNMISET) Answered by Fire, a 2006 television drama concerning the crisis which led to the INTERFET mission.
Revised: See also East Timor History of East Timor United Nations Mission of Support to East Timor (UNMISET) Answered by Fire, a 2006 television drama concerning the crisis which led to the INTERFET mission.
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Original:  International Force East Timor Medal Coalition of the willing Australian Involvement in the East Timor Invasion
Revised:  Coalition of the willing Australian Involvement in the East Timor Invasion
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Original:  Erythropoietin and its receptor are both present in the central nervous system with erythropoietin alpha capable of crossing the blood brain barrier via active transport .
Revised:  Erythropoietin and its receptor were thought to be present in the central nervous system with erythropoietin alpha capable of crossing the blood brain barrier via active transport .
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Original:  The presence of Epo within the spinal fluid of infants and the expression of Epo-R in the spinal cord, suggesting a role by Epo within the CNS . Epo and Epo-R is expressed in the mammalian retina, and therefore Epo represents a potential therapy to protect photoreceptors damaged from hypoxic pretreatment.
Revised:  The presence of Epo within the spinal fluid of infants and the expression of Epo-R in the spinal cord, suggested a potential role by Epo within the CNS . Epo and Epo-R is expressed in the mammalian retina, and therefore Epo represents a potential therapy to protect photoreceptors damaged from hypoxic pretreatment.
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Original:  The presence of Epo within the spinal fluid of infants and the expression of Epo-R in the spinal cord, suggesting a role by Epo within the CNS . Epo and Epo-R is expressed in the mammalian retina, and therefore Epo represents a potential therapy to protect photoreceptors damaged from hypoxic pretreatment.
Revised:  The presence of Epo within the spinal fluid of infants and the expression of Epo-R in the spinal cord, suggesting a role by Epo within the CNS therefore Epo represented a potential therapy to protect photoreceptors damaged from hypoxic pretreatment.
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Original:   Erythropoietin has been shown to protect nerve cells from hypoxia-induced glutamate toxicity.
Revised:  In some animal studies Erythropoietin has been shown to protect nerve cells from hypoxia-induced glutamate toxicity.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Epo has also been demonstrated to enhance nerve recovery after spinal trauma.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Epo has also been reported to enhance nerve recovery after spinal trauma.
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Original:  These results showed that RhEpo has both an acute and delayed beneficial action in ischemic spinal cord injury.
Revised:  These results suggested that RhEpo has both an acute and delayed beneficial action in ischemic spinal cord injury.
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Original:   Development with mutant Epo and EpoR While EpoR has been found in high levels in the embryonic brain, its role in brain development is unclear.
Revised:  Development with mutant Epo and EpoR While EpoR was reportedly detected in the embryonic brain, its role in brain development is unclear.
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Original:  Epo stimulates neural progenitor cells and prevents apoptosis in the embryonic brain in mice.
Revised:  In one study Epo stimulated neural progenitor cells and prevents apoptosis in the embryonic brain in mice.
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Original:  Epo stimulates neural progenitor cells and prevents apoptosis in the embryonic brain in mice.
Revised:  Epo stimulates neural progenitor cells and prevented apoptosis in the embryonic brain in mice.
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Original:  The neuroprotective activity of Epo can be observed as early as embryonic day 10.5 in the developing brain and contributes to selective cell survival in the developing brain.
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Original:  Erythropoietin mutants R103-E and S100-E (though S100 in Epo doesn't exist) has been reportedto be non-erythropoietin but retain the neuroprotective function.
Revised:  Erythropoietin mutants R103-E and S100-E (though S100 in Epo doesn't exist) has been reported to be non-erythropoietin but retain the neuroprotective function.
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Original:  Erythropoietin and its receptor are also present in the peripheral nervous system, specifically in the bodies and axons of ganglions in the dorsal root, and at increased levels in Schwann cells after peripheral nerve injury.
Revised:  Erythropoietin and its receptor are also reported in the peripheral nervous system, specifically in the bodies and axons of ganglions in the dorsal root, and at increased levels in Schwann cells after peripheral nerve injury.
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Original:  The distribution of EpoR is different from Epo, specifically in some neuronal cell bodies in the dorsal root ganglion, endothelial cells, and Schwann cells of normal nerves.
Revised:  The distribution of EpoR was different from Epo, specifically in some neuronal cell bodies in the dorsal root ganglion, endothelial cells, and Schwann cells of normal nerves.
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Original: __ve__{"type":"linear","range":{"type":"range","from":484,"to":636 Erythropoietin in neuroprotection is the use of the glycoprotein erythropoietin (Epo) for neuroprotection.
Revised:  Erythropoietin in neuroprotection is the use of the glycoprotein erythropoietin (Epo) for neuroprotection.
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