wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The blanketing effect is thus highly dependent on metallicity, the fraction of astronomical bodies by mass that are composed of astronomical metals .
Revised:  The blanketing effect is thus highly dependent on metallicity, the fraction of elements other than hydrogen and helium that compose it .
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Original:  Biography Beverly Derewianka did her Bachelor of Arts in 1967 at the University of Sydney.
Revised:  Biography Beverly Derewianka completed a Bachelor of Arts in 1967 at the University of Sydney.
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Original:  Beverly was admitted as an Emeritus Professor at UOW in 2017.
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Original:  Beverly Derewianka has    successfully applied various funded projects, with the total amount over $5m since 1999.
Revised:  Beverly Derewianka has Beverly Derewianka has successfully applied various funded projects, with the total amount over $5m since 1999.
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Original: Beverly Derewianka has successfully applied various funded projects, with the total amount over $ 5m since 1999.
Revised: Over her career, Derewianka has attracted over $ 5m since 1999.
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Original:  This involved a collaboration among four universities in planning and delivering a week-long summer school for 250 teachers.
Revised:  It involved a collaboration among four universities in planning and delivering a week-long summer school for 250 teachers.
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Original:  Her publications include grammar description, langugage teaching and assessment and genre-based pedagogy.
Revised:  Derewianka has published research on topics such grammar description, langugage teaching and assessment and genre-based pedagogy.
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Original:  Reviewed in The Australian Journal of Linguistics (14th September 2011), her publication with Professor Frances Christie, School Discourse – based on findings from our ARC Discovery project – was described as ‘an invaluable resource for teachers of primary and secondary students’ and is the best-selling monograph of the series.
Revised:  Reviewed in The Australian Journal of Linguistics (14th September 2011), her co-authored book with Professor Frances Christie, School Discourse – based on findings from our ARC Discovery project – was described as ‘an invaluable resource for teachers of primary and secondary students’ and is the best-selling monograph of the series.
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Original:  She  received several important awards for her achievement in educational linguistics and literacy, including the Nicoll Award for Best Teacher Education Publication and the Australian Literacy Educators’ Association Citation of Merit Award for distinguished contribution to literacy education in Australia.
Revised:  She has received several important awards for her achievement in educational linguistics and literacy, including the Nicoll Award for Best Teacher Education Publication and the Australian Literacy Educators’ Association Citation of Merit Award for distinguished contribution to literacy education in Australia.
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Original:  She  received several important awards for her achievement in educational linguistics and literacy, including the Nicoll Award for Best Teacher Education Publication and the Australian Literacy Educators’ Association Citation of Merit Award for distinguished contribution to literacy education in Australia.
Revised:  She received several important awards for her achievements in educational linguistics and literacy, including the Nicoll Award for Best Teacher Education Publication and the Australian Literacy Educators’ Association Citation of Merit Award for distinguished contribution to literacy education in Australia.
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Original: Among her siblings Subroto Mukherjee was the first air chief marshal of Indian Air Force who died in Tokyo and was married to Sharda Mukherjee (née' Pandit) a niece-in-law of Vijay Laxmi Pandit and Prashanta Mukherjee who was the chairperson of the Indian Railway Board and was married to Keshab Chandra Sen's granddaughter Violet.
Revised: Among her siblings Subroto Mukherjee was the first air chief marshal of Indian Air Force who died in Tokyo and was married to Sharda Mukherjee (née' Pandit) a niece-in-law of Vijaya Lakshmi Pandit and Prashanta Mukherjee who was the chairperson of the Indian Railway Board and was married to Keshab Chandra Sen's granddaughter Violet.
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Original: Indian National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Recipients of the Padma Bhushan in public affairs Category:Members of the West Bengal Legislative Assembly Category:English-language writers from India Category:Bengali politicians Category:  Das family of Telirbagh Category:Lok Sabha members from West Bengal Category:Women in West Bengal politics Category:20th-century Indian women politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicians Category:People from Malda distri
Revised: Indian National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Recipients of the Padma Bhushan in public affairs Category:Members of the West Bengal Legislative Assembly Category:English-language writers from India Category:Bengali politicians Category: Bengali people Category:Bengali Hindus Category: Das family of Telirbagh Category:Lok Sabha members from West Bengal Category:Women in West Bengal politics Category:20th-century Indian women politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicians Category:People from Malda distri
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Original: Category:Indian activists Category:People from Kolkata Category:Indian women's rights activists Category:Indian women activists Category:20th-century Indian people Category:Bengali people Category:Das family of Telirbagh Category: Brahmos Charulala Mukherjee was the first woman to receive 'Ishan' scholarship in 1899 and attended Presidency College, Calcutta.
Revised: Category:Indian activists Category:People from Kolkata Category:Indian women's rights activists Category:Indian women activists Category:20th-century Indian people Category:Bengali people Category:Das family of Telirbagh Category: Charulala Mukherjee was the first woman to receive 'Ishan' scholarship in 1899 and attended Presidency College, Calcutta.
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Original: Category:Indian activists Category:People from Kolkata Category:Indian women's rights activists Category:Indian women activists Category:20th-century Indian people Category:Bengali people Category:Das family of Telirbagh Category: Brahmos Charulala Mukherjee was the first woman to receive 'Ishan' scholarship in 1899 and attended Presidency College, Calcutta.
Revised: Category:Indian activists Category:People from Kolkata Category:Indian women's rights activists Category:Indian women activists Category:20th-century Indian people Category:Bengali people Category:Das family of Telirbagh Category: Brahmos 
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Original:  At Bengal front, she worked along her daughter Renuka Ray and Romola Sinha, who were noted for their fight for abolition of Devdasi system, prostitution and rehabilitation of children of porstitutes .
Revised:  At Bengal front, she worked along her daughter Renuka Ray and Romola Sinha, who were noted for their fight for abolition of Devdasi system, prostitution and rehabilitation of children of prostitutes .
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Original:  As part of the preparations for the BPF's return to combat , Vice-Admiral Bernard Rawlings – the commander of the fleet's combat force – decided at around this time to dispatch Implacable and several other recently arrived warships to attack the Japanese positions at Truk.
Revised:  As part of the preparations for the BPF's return to combat the commander of the fleet's combat force – decided at around this time to dispatch Implacable and several other recently arrived warships to attack the Japanese positions at Truk.
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Original:  As part of the preparations for the BPF's return to combat , Vice-Admiral Bernard Rawlings – the commander of the fleet's combat force – decided at around this time to dispatch Implacable and several other recently arrived warships to attack the Japanese positions at Truk.
Revised:  As part of the preparations for the BPF's return to combat , Vice-Admiral Bernard Rawlings – the commander of the fleet's combat force , Vice-Admiral Bernard Rawlings, decided at around this time to dispatch Implacable and several other recently arrived warships to attack the Japanese positions at Truk.
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Original:  The crews of the ships involved, including Implacables aircraft pilots, were not told that the operation was being undertaken for trainingpurposes .
Revised:  The crews of the ships involved, including Implacables aircraft pilots, were not told that the main purpose of the operation was training .
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Original:  This attack was the first time that Seafires had been used as fighter bombers in the Pacific.
Revised:  This attack was the first time that Seafires had been used as fighter-bombers in the Pacific.
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Original:  The British aircraft  were fired on by Japanese anti-aircraft guns throughout the day , and reported finding few worthwhile targets .
Revised:  The British aircraft reported finding few worthwhile targets; they were fired on by Japanese anti-aircraft guns throughout the day , and reported finding few worthwhile targets .
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Original:  The British aircraft  were fired on by Japanese anti-aircraft guns throughout the day , and reported finding few worthwhile targets .
Revised:  The British aircraft were fired on by Japanese anti-aircraft guns throughout the day .
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Original:  these aircraft were fired on and tracked by searchlights  but did not suffer any casualties.
Revised:  these aircraft were fired on and tracked by searchlights , but did not suffer any casualties.
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Original:  As Achilles sailed away from Truk, the cruiser's anti-aircraft gunners fired on two aircraft which approached her from the direction of the atoll  until they were identified as British Avengers.
Revised:  As Achilles sailed away from Truk, her anti-aircraft gunners fired on two aircraft which approached her from the direction of the atoll until they were identified as British Avengers.
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Original:  As Achilles sailed away from Truk, the cruiser's anti-aircraft gunners fired on two aircraft which approached her from the direction of the atoll  until they were identified as British Avengers.
Revised:  As Achilles sailed away from Truk, the cruiser's anti-aircraft gunners fired on two aircraft which approached her from the direction of the atoll , until they were identified as British Avengers.
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Original:  However, the ammunition for these weapons was fitted with proximity fuses intended for use against aircraft, and exploded in the palm trees above her targets.
Revised:  However, the ammunition for these weapons was fitted with proximity fuses intended for use against aircraft, and exploded in the palm trees above their targets.
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Original:  As the fallen foliage camouflaged the Japanese positions  further attacks were ineffective.
Revised:  As the fallen foliage hid the Japanese positions further attacks were ineffective.
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Original:  As the fallen foliage camouflaged the Japanese positions  further attacks were ineffective.
Revised:  As the fallen foliage camouflaged the Japanese positions , further attacks were ineffective.
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Original:  A subsequent investigation found that a faulty split pin had fallen out of Swiftsures Admiralty Fire Control Table, most likely due to concussion from the initial shots, causing it to provide greatly inaccurate results to the guns.
Revised:  A subsequent investigation found that a faulty split pin had fallen out of Swiftsures Admiralty Fire Control Table, most likely due to concussion from the initial shots, causing it to provide highly inaccurate results to the guns.
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Original:  Consideration was given to using the force to attack Truk again, with this operation possibly also including an invasion of the atoll by Australian or New Zealand forces, but this came to nothing as the war ended with Japan 's decision to surrender on 15 August.
Revised:  Consideration was given to using the force to attack Truk again, with this operation possibly also including an invasion of the atoll by Australian or New Zealand forces, but this was unnecessary as Japan surrendered on 15 August.
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Original:  The Japanese soldiers and sailors were repatriated from Truk during November and December 1945.
Revised:  The Japanese soldiers and sailors on Truk were repatriated during November and December 1945.
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Original:  one of these aircraft crashed into the sea due to an error in attaching it to Implacables catapult, resulting in the death of its pilot.
Revised:  one of these aircraft crashed into the sea due to an error in attaching it to Implacables catapult, causing the death of its pilot.
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Original:  These generally comprised five Avengers armed with bombs and four Fireflies with rockets and cannon .
Revised:  These generally comprised five Avengers armed with bombs and four Fireflies with rockets and cannons .
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Original:  These generally comprised five Avengers armed with bombs and four Fireflies with rockets and cannons .
Revised:  These generally comprised five Avengers armed with bombs and four Fireflies with rockets and cannon .
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Original:  As his family became more and more closely connected to the family of Supreme Court Justice William V.S. Tubman, Frank began to become prominent: when Tubman ran for President in 1943, he was rumoured to be Tubman's first choice for Vice President, although his younger brother William was eventually chosen . Liberia: William R. Tolbert - 'In the Pantheon of Great African Leaders'.
Revised:  As his family became more and more closely connected to the family of Supreme Court Justice William V.S. Tubman, Frank began to become prominent: when Tubman ran for President in 1943, he was rumoured to be Tubman's first choice for Vice President, although his younger brother William was eventually chosen , Liberia: William R. Tolbert - 'In the Pantheon of Great African Leaders'.
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Original: Frank Emmanuel Tolbert (February 3, 1910 – April 22, 1980) was a Liberian politician and brother of President William R. Tolbert, Jr. The oldest son of Daniel Frank Tolbert , national chairman of the ruling True Whig Party, he grew up in Bensonville, attended Zion Praise Baptist Church, graduated from Liberia College, and became involved in politics relatively early in life.
Revised: Frank Emmanuel Tolbert (February 3, 1910 – April 22, 1980) was a Liberian politician and brother of President William R. Tolbert, Jr. The oldest son of William R. Tolbert Sr. , national chairman of the ruling True Whig Party, he grew up in Bensonville, attended Zion Praise Baptist Church, graduated from Liberia College, and became involved in politics relatively early in life.
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Original:  By 1976, he was a member of the Senate and had been elected its president pro temp ."Inauguration Begins Today: Tolbert-Greene to Serve for 8 Yrs."
Revised:  By 1976, he was a member of the Senate and had been elected its President Pro Tempore ."Inauguration Begins Today: Tolbert-Greene to Serve for 8 Yrs."
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Original: Liberian people Category:Americo-Liberian people Category:People of Americo-Liberian descent Category:Tolbert family (Liberia) Category:Members of the Senate of Liberia Category:Presidents pro tempore of the Senate of Liberia Category:Executed Liberian people Category:People from Montserrado County Category:True Whig Party politicians Category:University of Liberia alumni Category:People executed by Liberia by firing squad Category:Filmed executions Category:20th-century Baptis
Revised: Liberian people Category:Americo-Liberian people Category:People of Americo-Liberian descent Category:Tolbert family (Liberia) Category:Members of the Senate of Liberia Category:Presidents pro tempore of the Senate of Liberia Category:Executed Liberian people Category:People from Montserrado County Category:True Whig Party politicians Category:University of Liberia alumni Category:People executed by Liberia by firing squad Category:Filmed executions Category:20th-century Baptists Category:20th-century African-American peop
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Original: The broader concept of Malay world has its origin from the conceptualisation of Malay as a race by the Germany scientist Johann Friedrich Blumenbach.
Revised: The broader concept of Malay world has its origin from the conceptualisation of Malay as a race by the German scientist Johann Friedrich Blumenbach.
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Original:  This broad conception of Malay was largely derived from the strong presence of Malay cultural influence, particularly in linguistic, throughout the Southeast Asia at the time of European colonisation.
Revised:  This broad conception of Malay was largely derived from the strong presence of Malay cultural influence, particularly in linguistic, throughout Southeast Asia at the time of European colonisation.
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Original:   Malay language was one aspect of the prestige of the sultanates in  region, and considered as a language of the educated people in Southeast Asia during the 17th and 18th century.
Revised:  The Malay language was one aspect of the prestige of the sultanates in region, and considered as a language of the educated people in Southeast Asia during the 17th and 18th century.
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Original:   Malay language was one aspect of the prestige of the sultanates in  region, and considered as a language of the educated people in Southeast Asia during the 17th and 18th century.
Revised:  Malay language was one aspect of the prestige of the sultanates in the region, and considered as a language of the educated people in Southeast Asia during the 17th and 18th century.
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Original:  Various foreign and local records show that Melayu (Malay) and its similar sounding variants appear to apply as an old toponym to the territory in Sumatra, which later possibly adopted as the ancient Straits of Malacca region in general as it is common for people in the region.
Revised:  Various foreign and local records show that Melayu (Malay) and its similar sounding variants appear to apply as an old toponym to the ancient Straits of Malacca region in general as it is common for people in the region.
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Original:  The term gradually developed circa 15th century into an ethnonym throughout Malacca when Sumatran-origin people migrated to the peninsula and consolidate the Melaka Sultanate as a regional power.
Revised:  The term gradually developed into an ethnonym throughout Malacca when Sumatran-origin people migrated to the peninsula and consolidate the Melaka Sultanate as a regional power.
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Original:  The term gradually developed circa 15th century into an ethnonym throughout Malacca when Sumatran-origin people migrated to the peninsula and consolidate the Melaka Sultanate as a regional power.
Revised:  The term gradually developed circa 15th century into an ethnonym throughout the consolidation of Melaka Sultanate as a regional power.
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Original:  Tome Pires, an apothecary who stayed in Malacca from 1512 to 1515, after the Portuguese conquest, explained how the former Malacca classified merchants calling its port into four groups, of which Melayu (the Malays ) did not appear in the list, suggesting they were not then regarded as category outside the Malacca itself.
Revised:  Tome Pires, an apothecary who stayed in Melaka from 1512 to 1515, after the Portuguese conquest, explained how the former Malacca classified merchants calling its port into four groups, of which Melayu (the Malays ) did not appear in the list, suggesting they were not then regarded as category outside the Malacca itself.
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Original:  Tome Pires, an apothecary who stayed in Malacca from 1512 to 1515, after the Portuguese conquest, explained how the former Malacca classified merchants calling its port into four groups, of which Melayu (the Malays ) did not appear in the list, suggesting they were not then regarded as category outside the Malacca itself.
Revised:  Tome Pires, an apothecary who stayed in Malacca from 1512 to 1515, after the Portuguese conquest, explained how the former Malacca classified merchants calling its port into four groups, of which the Malays or Melayu did not appear in the list, suggesting they were not then regarded as category outside the Malacca itself.
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Original:  Tome Pires, an apothecary who stayed in Malacca from 1512 to 1515, after the Portuguese conquest, explained how the former Malacca classified merchants calling its port into four groups, of which Melayu (the Malays ) did not appear in the list, suggesting they were not then regarded as category outside the Malacca itself.
Revised:  Tome Pires, an apothecary who stayed in Malacca from 1512 to 1515, after the Portuguese conquest, explained how the former Malacca classified merchants calling its port into four groups, of which Melayu (the Malays ) did not appear in the list, suggesting they were not then regarded as category outside the Melaka itself.
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Original:  An identical term, Tanah Melayu (literally the 'Malay land') is found in various Malay records, one of them dating back to the early 17th century.
Revised:  An identical term, Tanah Melayu (literally 'Malay land') is found in various Malay records, one of them dating back to the early 17th century.
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Original:  An identical term, Tanah Melayu (literally the 'Malay land') is found in various Malay records, one of them dating back to the early 17th century.
Revised:  An identical term, Tanah Melayu (literally the 'Malay land') is found in various Malay texts, of which the oldest are dating back to the early 17th century.
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Original:  In the early 16th century, Tomé Pires coins an almost similar term, Terra de Tana Malaio for the southeastern part of Sumatra, where the deposed Sultan of Melaka, Mahmud Shah established his exiled government in Malacca .
Revised:  In the early 16th century, Tomé Pires coins an almost similar term, Terra de Tana Malaio for the southeastern part of Sumatra, where the deposed Sultan of Melaka, Mahmud Shah established his exiled government .
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Original:  Among the textbooks available during the British Malayaperiod, Richard Olaf Winstedt's Ilmu Alam Melayu ('Geography of the Malay world') presents the clearest picture of the territoriality of the Malay community.
Revised:  Among the textbooks available during colonial Malaya, Winstedt's Ilmu Alam Melayu ('Geography of the Malay world') presents the clearest picture of the territoriality of the Malay community.
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Original:  He describes not only the British colonies and protectorates in the Peninsula (British Malaya) and Borneo(British Borneo) , but also the Dutch East Indies and the Spanish colonial territory .
Revised:  He describes not only the British colonies and protectorates in the Malay Peninsula and Borneo , but also the Dutch East Indies and the Spanish colonial territory .
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Original:  He describes not only the British colonies and protectorates in the Peninsula (British Malaya) and Borneo(British Borneo) , but also the Dutch East Indies and the Spanish colonial territory .
Revised:  He describes not only the British colonies and protectorates in the Peninsula (British Malaya) and Borneo(British Borneo) , but also the Netherlands East Indies and the Spanish colonial territory .
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