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Original: Mr Karasin says "Western media is a well-organised machine, which is showing only those pictures which fit in well with their thoughts.
Revised: Mr Karasin says "Western media is a well-organized machine, which is showing only those pictures which fit in well with their thoughts.
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Original:  We find it very difficult to squeeze our opinion in the pages of their newspapers," and "Just as it was 20-30 years ago, it remains the same today ... objectivity is not a typical trait of some Western journalists and television channels," The accurasy of Western media is also questioned by South Ossetia's press service who claims Western media outlets can't be trusted.
Revised:  We find it very difficult to squeeze our opinion in the pages of their newspapers," and "Just as it was 20-30 years ago, it remains the same today ... objectivity is not a typical trait of some Western journalists and television channels," The accuracy of Western media is also questioned by South Ossetia's press service who claims Western media outlets can't be trusted.
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Original:  No western camera crews have been working in the conflict zone ,
Revised:  No western camera crews have been working in the conflict zone .
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Original:  Suslan Bekoev, South Ossetian committee for information and press, says “ Only the Russian media and one Ukrainian channel have been filming in the breakaway republic.
Revised:  Suslan Bekoev, South Ossetian committee for information and press, says " Only the Russian media and one Ukrainian channel have been filming in the breakaway republic.
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Original:  No western camera crews have been working in the conflict zone.  
Revised:  No western camera crews have been working in the conflict zone. " 
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Original: Grammy Award  winning musician and vocalist Isaac Hayes was found dead in his home in Memphis, Tennessee , USA. According to initial police reports, his wife found him collapsed near a treadmill exercise machine in their home after she returned from running errands.
Revised: Grammy Award winning musician and vocalist Isaac Hayes was found dead in his home in Memphis, Tennessee in the United States. According to initial police reports, his wife found him collapsed near a treadmill exercise machine in their home after she returned from running errands.
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Original:  The Shelby County Sherrfs Department responded to his wife's phone call and took Mr. Hayes to Baptist East Hospital in Memphis, where he was pronounced dead at 2:08 AM EST.
Revised:  The Shelby County Sheriffs Department responded to his wife's phone call and took Mr. Hayes to Baptist East Hospital in Memphis, where he was pronounced dead at 2:08 AM EST.
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Original:  Isaac Hayes was 65.
Revised:  Hayes was 65.
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Original:  He also provided the voice of the character "Chef " on the animated TV series "South Park" , but left after the episode "Trapped In the Closet", which was a satire on the controversial Church of Scientology, to which Isaac Hayes belonged
Revised:  He also provided the voice of the character Chef on the animated TV series "South Park" , but left after the episode "Trapped In the Closet", which was a satire on the controversial Church of Scientology, to which Isaac Hayes belonged
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Original:  He also provided the voice of the character "Chef " on the animated TV series "South Park" , but left after the episode "Trapped In the Closet", which was a satire on the controversial Church of Scientology, to which Isaac Hayes belonged
Revised:  He also provided the voice of the character "Chef " on the animated TV series South Park , but left after the episode "Trapped In the Closet", which was a satire on the controversial Church of Scientology, to which Isaac Hayes belonged
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Original:  He also provided the voice of the character "Chef " on the animated TV series "South Park" , but left after the episode "Trapped In the Closet", which was a satire on the controversial Church of Scientology, to which Isaac Hayes belonged
Revised:  He also provided the voice of the character "Chef " on the animated TV series "South Park" , but left after the episode "Trapped In the Closet", which was a satire on the controversial Church of Scientology, to which Hayes was a member
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Original: Born Isaac Lee Hayes, Jr. in 1942, he became a noted soul and funk music artist  whose work also included singer-songwriter, musician, record producer, arranger, composer  and actor.
Revised: Born Isaac Lee Hayes, Jr. in 1942, he became a noted soul and funk music artist , whose work also included singer-songwriter, musician, record producer, arranger, composer and actor.
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Original: Born Isaac Lee Hayes, Jr. in 1942, he became a noted soul and funk music artist  whose work also included singer-songwriter, musician, record producer, arranger, composer  and actor.
Revised: Born Isaac Lee Hayes, Jr. in 1942, he became a noted soul and funk music artist whose work also included singer-songwriter, musician, record producer, arranger, composer , and actor.
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Original:  His body of work includes soundtracks to the Blaxploitation films Shaft (in which he appeared in a cameo role), Three Tough Guys  and Truck Turner (acting in a featured role both films).
Revised:  His body of work includes soundtracks to the Blaxploitation films Shaft (in which he appeared in a cameo role), Three Tough Guys , and Truck Turner (acting in a featured role both films).
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Original:  He made us cry and made us happy and shook our emotions, Apart from being the poet of the Palestinian wound, which is hurting all Arabs and all honest people in the world, he is a master poet,"  
Revised:  He made us cry and made us happy and shook our emotions, Apart from being the poet of the Palestinian wound, which is hurting all Arabs and all honest people in the world, he is a master poet," . 
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Original:  Ahmed Fouad Negm a famous Egyptian poet told reuters "He translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
Revised:  Ahmed Fouad Negm a famous Egyptian poet told Reuters "He translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
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Original: Image:Mahmood darwish.jpg|Mahmoud Darwish during a poet night in Haifa On Saturday August 9,2008 the Palestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish died in Texas three days after heart surgery at Memorial Hermann Hospital.
Revised:  On Saturday August 9,2008 the Palestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish died in Texas three days after heart surgery at Memorial Hermann Hospital.
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Original: On Saturday August 9, 2008 the Palestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish died in Texas three days after heart surgery at Memorial Hermann Hospital.
Revised: On Saturday August 9, the Palestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish died in Texas three days after heart surgery at Memorial Hermann Hospital.
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Original: On Saturday August 9, the Palestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish died in Texas three days after heart surgery at Memorial Hermann Hospital .
Revised:  Palestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish died in Texas three days after heart surgery at Memorial Hermann Hospital .
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Original:  The man's poet is considered as an encapsulation of the the Palestinian cause  Palestinians in Ramallah went to the streets, some weeping, gathered round candles in the darkened streets  lit candles expressing their sadness.
Revised:  The man's poems are considered as an encapsulation of the the Palestinian cause Palestinians in Ramallah went to the streets, some weeping, gathered round candles in the darkened streets lit candles expressing their sadness.
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Original:  The man's poet is considered as an encapsulation of the the Palestinian cause  Palestinians in Ramallah went to the streets, some weeping, gathered round candles in the darkened streets  lit candles expressing their sadness.
Revised:  The man's poet is considered as an encapsulation of the the Palestinian cause . Palestinians in Ramallah went to the streets, some weeping, gathered round candles in the darkened streets lit candles expressing their sadness.
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Original:  The man's poet is considered as an encapsulation of the the Palestinian cause  Palestinians in Ramallah went to the streets, some weeping, gathered round candles in the darkened streets  lit candles expressing their sadness.
Revised:  The man's poet is considered as an encapsulation of the the Palestinian cause Palestinians in Ramallah went to the streets, some weeping, gathered around candles in the darkened streets lit candles expressing their sadness.
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Original:  The man's poet is considered as an encapsulation of the the Palestinian cause  Palestinians in Ramallah went to the streets, some weeping, gathered round candles in the darkened streets  lit candles expressing their sadness.
Revised:  The man's poet is considered as an encapsulation of the the Palestinian cause Palestinians in Ramallah went to the streets, some weeping, gathered round candles in the darkened streets and lit candles expressing their sadness.
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Original:  "The passing of our great poet, Mahmoud Darwish, the lover of Palestine, the pioneer of the modern Palestinian cultural project, and the brilliant national leader, will leave a great gap in our political, cultural and national lives,  Words cannot describe the depth of sadness in our hearts, Mahmoud, may God help us for your loss." he said.
Revised:  "The passing of our great poet, Mahmoud Darwish, the lover of Palestine, the pioneer of the modern Palestinian cultural project, and the brilliant national leader, will leave a great gap in our political, cultural and national lives, Words cannot describe the depth of sadness in our hearts, Mahmoud, may God help us for your loss." 
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Original:  A day after his death many intellects politicians in Middle East gave their tributes in honor of him.
Revised:  A day after his death many politicians in Middle East gave their tributes in honor of him.
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Original:  A day after his death many intellects politicians in Middle East gave their tributes in honor of him.
Revised:  A day after his death many intellects intellectuals and politicians in the Middle East gave their tributes in honor of him.
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Original:  Ahmed Fouad Negm a famous Egyptian poet told Reuters " He  translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
Revised:  Ahmed Fouad Negm a famous Egyptian poet told Reuters " h translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
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Original:  Ahmed Fouad Negm a famous Egyptian poet told Reuters " He  translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
Revised:  Ahmed Fouad Negm a famous Egyptian poet told Reuters " He e translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
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Original:  He made us cry and made us happy and shook our emotions, Apart from being the poet of the Palestinian wound, which is hurting all Arabs and all honest people in the world, he is a master poet ,".
Revised:  He made us cry and made us happy and shook our emotions, Apart from being the poet of the Palestinian wound, which is hurting all Arabs and all honest people in the world, he is a master poet ."
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Original: Palestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish died Saturday in southern American state of Texas three days after heart surgery at Memorial Hermann Hospital in Houston.
Revised: leftPalestinian poet Mahmoud Darwish died Saturday in southern American state of Texas three days after heart surgery at Memorial Hermann Hospital in Houston.
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Original:  Ahmed Fouad Negm  a famous Egyptian poet  told Reuters "[h]e translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
Revised:  Ahmed Fouad Negm , a famous Egyptian poet told Reuters "[h]e translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
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Original:  Ahmed Fouad Negm  a famous Egyptian poet  told Reuters "[h]e translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
Revised:  Ahmed Fouad Negm a famous Egyptian poet , told Reuters "[h]e translated the pain of the Palestinians in a magical way.
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Original:  One deployed parachute is reported to have been seen near the wreckage, but reports state is does not appear to have been deployed by a survivor.
Revised:  One deployed parachute is reported to have been seen near the wreckage, but reports state it does not appear to have been deployed by a survivor.
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Original:  The Cirrus was carrying two people, both who had died, and was traveling from Polson, Montana to Rock Springs.
Revised:  The Cirrus was carrying two people, both of whom died, and was traveling from Polson, Montana to Rock Springs.
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Original:  The names of the deceased have not been released, pending the notification of family members 
Revised:  The names of the deceased have not been released, pending the notification of family members .AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH DINOSORS DID THIS THE WORLD IS COMING TO AN END!!!
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Original:  Turkey has been fighting member of the PKK since 1984
Revised:  Turkey has been fighting militants of the PKK since 1984
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Original:  The attack occurred in an area where Turkey has been frequently fighting militants of the Kurdistan Workers' Party (PKK) . Recently, the Turkish military launched airstrikes in Iraq in an attempt to disable the group.
Revised:  The attack occurred in an area where Turkey has been frequently fighting militants of the PKK . Recently, the Turkish military launched airstrikes in Iraq in an attempt to disable the group.
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Original:  With this assistance  the plane, with five passengers on board, landed safely .
Revised:  With this assistance , the plane, with five passengers on board, landed safely .
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Original:  With this assistance  the plane, with five passengers on board, landed safely .
Revised:  With this assistance the plane, with five people on board, landed safely .
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Original:   The pilot  succeeded in climbing to an altitude  6500 feet without any problems, but needed to communicate to ensure a safe landing.
Revised:  The pilot succeeded in climbing to an altitude of 6500 feet without any problems, but needed to communicate to ensure a safe landing.
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Original:  He originally attempted to contact Kerry airport, and after that failed he made attempts to contact Cork  
Revised:  He originally attempted to contact Kerry airport, and after that failed he made attempts to contact Cork . 
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Original: In November 2007, a twin engine 30 year old Piper aircraft lost all electrical power on board shortly after departing from Kerry airport, Ireland for a flight to Jersey.
Revised: In November 2007, a twin-engine 30-year-old Piper aircraft lost all electrical power on board shortly after departing from Kerry airport, Ireland for a flight to Jersey.
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Original:  [[Image:Piper.seneca.pa34.g-elis.bristol.arp.jpg|A Piper PA-34 Seneca II ]] The report into the incident published on August 6 revealed how a quick thinking air traffic controller in Cork started sending directions to the pilot by text message.
Revised:  [[Image:Piper.seneca.pa34.g-elis.bristol.arp.jpg|A Piper PA-34 Seneca II ]] The report into the incident published on August 6 revealed how a quick-thinking air traffic controller in Cork started sending directions to the pilot by text message.
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Original:  Prior to lowering the undercarriage  the first officer noticed that the nose wheel had failed to retract fully and was actually at half its travel.
Revised:  Prior to lowering the undercarriage , the first officer noticed that the nose wheel had failed to retract fully and was actually at half its travel.
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Original:  The report found that  loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage and suggested that the probable cause was an insufficient battery voltage to excite the alternator's windings , with a relay in poor condition being subjected to a heavy load following take off possibly contributing to the incident
Revised:  The report found that the loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage and suggested that the probable cause was an insufficient battery voltage to excite the alternator's windings , with a relay in poor condition being subjected to a heavy load following take off possibly contributing to the incident
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Original:  The report found that  loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage and suggested that the probable cause was an insufficient battery voltage to excite the alternator's windings , with a relay in poor condition being subjected to a heavy load following take off possibly contributing to the incident
Revised:  The report found that loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage , probably due to the battery voltage being insufficient to excite the alternator's windings , with a relay in poor condition being subjected to a heavy load following take off possibly contributing to the incident
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Original:  The report found that  loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage and suggested that the probable cause was an insufficient battery voltage to excite the alternator's windings , with a relay in poor condition being subjected to a heavy load following take off possibly contributing to the incident
Revised:  The report found that loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage and suggested that the probable cause was an insufficient battery voltage to excite the alternator's windings . The relay may have been in poor condition being subjected to a heavy load following take off possibly contributing to the incident
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Original:  The report found that  loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage and suggested that the probable cause was an insufficient battery voltage to excite the alternator's windings , with a relay in poor condition being subjected to a heavy load following take off possibly contributing to the incident
Revised:  The report found that loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage and suggested that the probable cause was an insufficient battery voltage to excite the alternator's windings , with a relay in poor condition after having been subjected to a heavy load following take off possibly contributing to the incident
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Original:  The report found that  loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage and suggested that the probable cause was an insufficient battery voltage to excite the alternator's windings , with a relay in poor condition being subjected to a heavy load following take off possibly contributing to the incident
Revised:  The report found that loss of electrical power was due to the aircraft's alternators failing to maintain the required voltage and suggested that the probable cause was an insufficient battery voltage to excite the alternator's windings , with a relay in poor condition being subjected to a heavy load following take-off, possibly contributing to the incident
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Original: The pilot, aged 39 with 1,900 hours of flying experience, succeeded in climbing to an altitude of 6,500 feet without any problems, but needed to communicate to ensure a safe landing.
Revised: The pilot, age 39 with 1,900 hours of flying experience, succeeded in climbing to an altitude of 6,500 feet without any problems, but needed to communicate to ensure a safe landing.
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Original:  "And I think just a lot of relief that the training was definitely worth it , " she continued.
Revised:  "And I think just a lot of relief that the training was definitely worth it . " she continued.
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Original:  "And I think just a lot of relief that the training was definitely worth it , " she continued.
Revised:  "And I think just a lot of relief that the training was definitely worth it , " 
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Original:  The American Walton Eller set a new Olympic record in  qualification round of the men's double trap with a score of 145.
Revised:  The American Walton Eller set a new Olympic record in the qualification round of the men's double trap with a score of 145.
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Original:  Medal Table zh:北京奧運每日簡報 (8月12日
Revised:  Medal zh:北京奧運每日簡報 (8月12日
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Original:  Medal Table zh:北京奧運每日簡報 (8月12日
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Original: Women's 200m individual medley Image:swimming pictogram.svg| 40px The Zimbabwean Kirsty Coventry set a new Olympic Record in semifinal of the women's 200m individual medley with a time of 2:09.53 minutes.
Revised: Women's 200m individual medley 40px The Zimbabwean Kirsty Coventry set a new Olympic Record in semifinal of the women's 200m individual medley with a time of 2:09.53 minutes.
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Original: 40px The America Michael Phelps set a new Olympic record when he finished in first place in heat six of the men's 200m butterfly with a time of 1:53.70.
Revised: 40px The American Michael Phelps set a new Olympic record when he finished in first place in heat six of the men's 200m butterfly with a time of 1:53.70.
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Original: The American Aaron Peirsol set a new world record and won the gold medal in the final of the men's 100m backstroke with a time of 52.54 seconds.
Revised:  American Aaron Peirsol set a new world record and won the gold medal in the final of the men's 100m backstroke with a time of 52.54 seconds.
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Original:  The American Michael Phelps set a new world record and won the gold medal in the final of the men's 200m freestyle with a time of 1:42.96 minutes.
Revised:  American Michael Phelps set a new world record and won the gold medal in the final of the men's 200m freestyle with a time of 1:42.96 minutes.
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Original:  The Australian Leisel Jones won the gold medal and set a new Olympic record in the final of the women's 100m breaststroke with a time of 1:05.17 minutes.
Revised:  Australian Leisel Jones won the gold medal and set a new Olympic record in the final of the women's 100m breaststroke with a time of 1:05.17 minutes.
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Original:  This record is one of many records set by Phelps throughout the Olympic games.
Revised:  This record is one of several set by Phelps throughout the Olympic games.
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Original:  This record is one of many records set by Phelps throughout the Olympic games.
Revised:  This record is one of many records set by Phelps during the Olympic games.
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Original: The declaration of  Kremlin puts an end to the four day Russian invasion of Georgia.
Revised: The declaration of the Kremlin puts an end to the four day Russian invasion of Georgia.
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Original: The declaration of  Kremlin puts an end to the four day Russian invasion of Georgia.
Revised: The declaration of Kremlin puts an end to the four day Russian offensive inside of Georgia.
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Original:  On August 7, Georgian troops launched an offensive against Tskhinvali, the capital of South Ossetia region.
Revised:  On August 7, Georgian troops responded with an offensive against Tskhinvali, the capital of South Ossetia region.
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Original:  The next day Russian forces entered the territory of Georgia and bombed several targets in the country.
Revised:  The next day Russian forces entered the territory of Georgia and started to bomb targets in the country.
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