wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: According to , the current population of the country - which was organised by , education, and - is in excess of the populations of Pakistan, Indonesia, Bangladesh, Brazil and the United States put together.
Revised: According to , the current population of the country is in excess of the populations of Pakistan, Indonesia, Bangladesh, Brazil and the United States put together.
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Original:  The 2011 census findings have suggested a preference to children over .
Revised:  The 2011 census findings have suggested a preference of over children .
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Original:  This is the lowest ever in the demographic history of the country," noting that "[t]he last census in 2001 had warned us about this, the tendency has worsened."
Revised:  This is the lowest ever in the demographic history of the country," he said, and noted "[t]he last census in 2001 had warned us about this, the tendency has worsened."
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Original:  This pattern remains consistent although the has prohibited hospitals from disclosing the gender of an .
Revised:  This pattern has continued although the has prohibited hospitals from disclosing the gender of an .
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Original:  In contrast, there are now 940 female adults for every one thousand men, in contrast to 2001, when every one thousand male adults had 933 women  .
Revised:  In contrast, there are now 940 female adults for every one thousand men, in contrast to 2001, when there were 933 women .
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Original:  In contrast, there are now 940 female adults for every one thousand men, in contrast to 2001, when every one thousand male adults had 933 women  .
Revised:  In contrast, there are now 940 female adults for every one thousand men, in contrast to 2001, when every one thousand male adults had 933 women per thousand males .
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Original:  However, in - the capital of India - only 866 females exist for every one thousand male individuals .
Revised:  However, in , the capital of India - only 866 females exist for every one thousand male individuals .
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Original:  However, in - the capital of India - only 866 females exist for every one thousand male individuals .
Revised:  However, in - the capital of India , only 866 females exist for every one thousand male individuals .
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Original:  However, in - the capital of India - only 866 females exist for every one thousand male individuals .
Revised:  However, in - the capital of India - only 866 females were counted for every one thousand male individuals .
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Original:  However, in - the capital of India - only 866 females exist for every one thousand male individuals .
Revised:  However, in - the capital of India - only 866 females exist for every one thousand males .
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Original:  For every one thousand boys below the age of seven, there were 914 girls, a decrease from the 2001 census, which reported of 927 females for every one thousand of male children.
Revised:  For every one thousand boys below the age of seven, there were 914 girls, a decrease from the 2001 census, which reported 927 females for every one thousand of male children.
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Original:  For every one thousand boys below the age of seven, there were 914 girls, a decrease from the 2001 census, which reported of 927 females for every one thousand of male children.
Revised:  For every one thousand boys below the age of seven, there were 914 girls, a decrease from the 2001 census, which reported of 927 female for every one thousand of male children.
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Original:  For every one thousand boys below the age of seven, there were 914 girls, a decrease from the 2001 census, which reported of 927 females for every one thousand of male children.
Revised:  For every one thousand boys below the age of seven, there were 914 girls, a decrease from the 2001 census, which reported of 927 females for every one thousand male children.
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Original: India's reports that the of the country has increased by 181 million in the space of one decade, a figure 17.6 percent greater than 2001.
Revised: India's reports that its has increased by 181 million in the space of one decade, a figure 17.6 percent greater than 2001.
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Original:  Between 1991 and 20011 , the population growth rate has steadily decreased.
Revised:  Between 1991 and 2011 , the population growth rate has steadily decreased.
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Original:  The increase in literate females is greater than that of males, the 2011 census reported.
Revised:  The increase in literate females was greater than that of males, the 2011 census reported.
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Original: India's reports that its has increased by 181 million in the space of one decade, a figure 17.6 percent greater than 2001.
Revised: India's reports that its has increased by 181 million in the span of one decade, a figure 17.6 percent greater than 2001.
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Original: The findings have suggest a preference of male over female children.
Revised: The findings have suggested a preference of male over female children.
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Original: This is Blunketts second time to be forced into standing down from office, stepping down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
Revised: This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, stepping down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
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Original:  A member of the oposition Liberal Democrat party, Greg Mulholland said "I think he's done the right thing [in quitting], having done several quite blatantly wrong things".
Revised:  A member of the opposition Liberal Democrat party, Greg Mulholland said "I think he's done the right thing [in quitting], having done several quite blatantly wrong things".
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Original: David Blunkett, the UK 's Work and Pensions Secretary has resigned his office following a meeting with Tony Blair today.
Revised: David Blunkett, the United Kingdom 's Work and Pensions Secretary has resigned his office following a meeting with Tony Blair today.
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Original: David Blunkett, the UK 's Work and Pensions Secretary has resigned his office following a meeting with Tony Blair today.
Revised: David Blunkett, the UK 's Work and Pensions Secretary , resigned his office following a meeting with Tony Blair today.
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Original:  Public pressure had been growing on Mr  Blunkett to resign after revealations emerged that he had broken the British Ministerial Code of Conduct in relation to his large shareholdings and short-lived directorship in a comapny called DNA Bioscience.
Revised:  Public pressure had been growing on Mr . Blunkett to resign after revealations emerged that he had broken the British Ministerial Code of Conduct in relation to his large shareholdings and short-lived directorship in a comapny called DNA Bioscience.
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Original: Public pressure had been growing on Mr. Blunkett to resign after revealations emerged that he had broken the British Ministerial Code of Conduct in relation to his large shareholdings and short-lived directorship in a comapny called DNA Bioscience.
Revised: Public pressure had been growing on Mr. Blunkett to resign after revelations emerged that he had broken the British Ministerial Code of Conduct in relation to his large shareholdings and short-lived directorship in a comapny called DNA Bioscience.
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Original:  This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, stepping down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
Revised:  This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
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Original:  This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
Revised:  It is the second time Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
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Original:  This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
Revised:  This is Blunkett's has been forced to stand down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
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Original:  This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
Revised:  This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims that his office fast-tracked a visa application.
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Original:  Yesterday Blunkett declared that he would not resign in an interview with the Sheffield Star , insisting that he had "done nothing wrong."
Revised:  Yesterday Blunkett declared that he would not resign , insisting that he had "done nothing wrong."
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Original:  The Map of the disaster Indian states Punjab, Jammu and Kashmir, Rajasthan, and Delhi were affected. experienced a power cutoff after the earthquake.
Revised:  The Map of the disaster 
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Original:  As of earlier today, officials in Pakistan and Afghanistan came up with statistics of 237 deaths in Pakistan and a total rising to 311.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Almost a decade ago, this region suffered an earthquake with a magnitude of 7.6. Effects in Behror and nearby areas A Wikinews correspondent reports the tremors were felt in Behror, Rajasthan at 2:50 PM IST.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Effects in Behror and nearby areas A Wikinews correspondent reports the tremors were felt in Behror, Rajasthan at 2:50 PM IST.
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Original:  According to Pakistani officials, the death toll is highest in Pakistan with 145 confirmed dead. reported the earthquake occurred at 212 depth due to .
Revised:  The death toll is highest in Pakistan with 145 confirmed dead. reported the earthquake occurred at 212 depth due to .
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Original:  it is alleged he used a knife and axe to attack to police officers   
Revised:  it is alleged he used a knife and axe to attack to police officers . 
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Original:  Deas was uninjured    
Revised:  Deas was uninjured . 
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Original:  I had a secret knock on his window which is how he knew to let me in." Grant says all Nowak's family live in Poland  
Revised:  I had a secret knock on his window which is how he knew to let me in." Grant says all Nowak's family live in Poland . 
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Original:  The motive was to fool her son, relatives and the community, including churchs, into thinking he had cancer in a scam to collect money.
Revised:  The motive was to fool her son, relatives and the community, including churchs, into thinking he had cancer in a to collect money.
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Original:  The motive was to fool her son, relatives and the community, including churchs, into thinking he had cancer in a to collect money.
Revised:  The motive was to fool her son, relatives and the community, including churchs, into thinking he had in a to collect money.
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Original:  Prosecutors said Carol Lynn Schnuphase, 47, shaved her son's head and eyebrows and fed him food laced with so that he would look sick and feel ill.
Revised:  s said Carol Lynn Schnuphase, 47, shaved her son's head and eyebrows and fed him food laced with so that he would look sick and feel ill.
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Original: Schnuphase's cousin, Patrick Kelsch, called the sentence "ridiculous" and said, "She's made a living as a con artist for years."
Revised: Schnuphase's cousin, Patrick Kelsch, called the sentence "ridiculous" and said, "She's made a living as a for years."
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Original: A Michigan judge sentenced a woman to a year in jail Tuesday for giving her 12-year-old son drugs so that he appeared to have , and told him he was dying.
Revised: A Michigan judge sentenced a woman to a year in jail Tuesday for giving her 12-year-old son drugs so that he appeared to have and told him he was dying.
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Original: A Michigan judge sentenced a woman to a year in jail Tuesday for giving her 12-year-old son drugs so that he appeared to have and told him he was dying.
Revised: A Michigan judge sentenced a woman to a year in jail Tuesday for giving her twelve-year-old son drugs so that he appeared to have and told him he was dying.
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Original:  The motive was to fool her son, relatives and the community, including churchs, into thinking he had in a to collect money. s said Carol Lynn Schnuphase, 47, shaved her son's head and eyebrows and fed him food laced with so that he would look sick and feel ill.
Revised:  The motive was to fool her son, relatives and the community, including churchs, into thinking he had in a to collect money. s said Carol Lynn Schnuphase, 47, shaved her son's head and eyebrows and fed him food laced with so he would look sick and feel ill.
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Original: A Michigan judge sentenced a woman to a year in jail Tuesday for giving her twelve-year-old son drugs so that he appeared to have and told him he was dying.
Revised: A Michigan judge sentenced a woman to a year in jail Tuesday for giving her twelve-year-old son drugs so that he appeared to have and telling him he was dying.
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Original:  said Carol Lynn Schnuphase, 47, shaved her son's head and eyebrows and fed him food laced with so he would look sick and feel ill.
Revised: s said Carol Lynn Schnuphase, 47, shaved her son's head and eyebrows and fed him food laced with so he would look sick and feel ill.
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Original: Edward Stobart, famed for the construction of the truck empire and being its for over thirty years, died at the age of 56 on Thursday.
Revised: Edward Stobart, famed for his construction of the truck empire and being its for over thirty years, died at the age of 56 on Thursday.
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Original:  In a statement, the Stobart Group commented: "It is with great sadness and regret that Stobart Group shares the news that Edward Stobart, son of Eddie Stobart, passed away at 8:10 AM this morning at University Hospital Coventry , after heart problems yesterday." 
Revised:  In a statement, the Stobart Group commented: "It is with great sadness and regret that Stobart Group shares the news that Edward Stobart, son of Eddie Stobart, passed away at 8:10 AM this morning at , after heart problems yesterday." 
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Original:  In a statement, the Stobart Group commented: "It is with great sadness and regret that Stobart Group shares the news that Edward Stobart, son of Eddie Stobart, passed away at 8:10 AM this morning at University Hospital Coventry , after heart problems yesterday." 
Revised:  In a statement, the Stobart Group commented: "It is with great sadness and regret that Stobart Group shares the news that Edward Stobart, son of Eddie Stobart, passed away at 8:10 AM this morning at University Hospital Coventry , after heart problems yesterday." When Eddie Stobart - Edward's father - created the company during the 1950s in in northern England, it originally involved itself in the business of agriculture. In the 1970s, the business was given the name Eddie Stobart Limited and became a haulage service.
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Original: Edward Stobart, famed for his construction of the truck empire and being its for over thirty years,  died at the age of 56 on Thursday.
Revised: Edward Stobart, famed for his construction of the truck empire and being its for over thirty years, has died at the age of 56 on Thursday.
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Original: Edward Stobart, famed for his construction of the truck empire and being its for over thirty years,  died at the age of 56 on Thursday.
Revised: Edward Stobart, famed for his construction of the truck empire and being its for over thirty years, died at the age of 56.
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Original:  it extended to include transportation by air and railways, as well as warehousing and management of logistics .
Revised:  it extended to include transportation by air and railways, as well as warehousing and management of .
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Original: Due to the that they had achieved via a of "Stobart spotters" , which involves the observation of their company's uniquely named vehicles, the Stobart Group decided to create an official followers' group, which now has in excess of twenty-five thousand members.
Revised: Due to the that they had achieved via a of 'Stobart spotters' , which involves the observation of their company's uniquely named vehicles, the Stobart Group decided to create an official followers' group, which now has in excess of twenty-five thousand members.
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Original:  The Stobart Group have expressed their condolences to "Edward's wife Mandy, his children and family at this difficult time   .
Revised:  The Stobart Group have expressed their condolences to "Edward's wife Mandy, his children and family at this difficult time ." .
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Original:  The six dead were all shot by riot police and opposition spokesman Gizachew Shiferaw said police used excessive force, the day previous, however, two of the dead were police shot by protesters.
Revised:  The dead were all shot by riot police and opposition spokesman Gizachew Shiferaw said police used excessive force, the day previous, however, two of the dead were police shot by protesters.
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Original: At least thirty-three more people have died in a second day of protests in Addis Ababa, the Capital of Ethopia .
Revised: At least thirty-three more people have died in a second day of protests in Addis Ababa, the Capital of Ethiopia .
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Original: The fallout from in Japan will cost Australia about 2 billion in lost export earnings in the near term due to lower sales of Australian exports to Japan, according to estimates in a brief released Thursday.
Revised: The fallout from in Japan will cost Australia about 2 billion in lost export earnings in the near term due to lower Australian exports to Japan, according to estimates in a brief released Thursday.
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Original:  The loss of Japanese markets has been a contributor to a 6 percent drop in the price and an 8 percent drop in the price of . Japan imports account for 27 per cent of Australia's iron ore and coal exports.
Revised:  The loss of Japanese markets has been a contributor to a 6 percent drop in the price and an 8 percent drop in the price of . Japan imports account for 27 percent of Australia's iron ore and coal exports.
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Original:  Recently Japanese industry had been seen as experiencing a good recovery after the .
Revised:  Recently , Japanese industry seemed to be rebounding from the .
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Original:  After China, Japan is Australia ' s largest export market, making up 15 percent of its total exports.
Revised:  After China, Japan is Australia ’ s largest export market, making up 15 percent of its total exports.
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Original:  Short term exports of "non-rural " are predicted to be lower as Japanese port facilities, coal-fire power stations and steel-making plants were damaged.
Revised:  Short term exports of "non-rural " are predicted to be lower as Japanese port facilities, coal-fired power stations and steel-making plants were damaged.
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Original:  Treasurer Wayne Swan said in the brief: " t he tragic events in Japan—together with the impact of floods and at home—will clearly mean revenues take a substantial hit in the near term . " 
Revised:  " t he tragic events in Japan—together with the impact of floods and at home—will clearly mean revenues take a substantial hit in the near term . " 
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Original:  Treasurer Wayne Swan said in the brief: " t he tragic events in Japan—together with the impact of floods and at home—will clearly mean revenues take a substantial hit in the near term . " 
Revised:  Treasurer Wayne Swan said in the brief: " he tragic events in Japan—together with the impact of floods and at home—will clearly mean revenues take a substantial hit in the near term . " 
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Original:  Treasurer Wayne Swan said in the brief: " t he tragic events in Japan—together with the impact of floods and at home—will clearly mean revenues take a substantial hit in the near term . " 
Revised:  Treasurer Wayne Swan said in the brief: " t The tragic events in Japan—together with the impact of floods and at home—will clearly mean revenues take a substantial hit in the near term . " 
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Original:  Treasurer Wayne Swan said in the brief: " t he tragic events in Japan—together with the impact of floods and at home—will clearly mean revenues take a substantial hit in the near term . " 
Revised:  Treasurer Wayne Swan said in the brief: " t he tragic events in Japan—together with the impact of floods and at home—will clearly mean revenues take a substantial hit in the near term " 
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Original: Al Jazeera reports that a group a top officials who "headed to Tunisia for talks have decided to stay there".
Revised: Al Jazeera reports that a group of top officials who "headed to Tunisia for talks have decided to stay there".
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Original:   Security sources suggest that the total number of defectors could be up to a dozen   .
Revised:  Security sources suggest that the total number of defectors could be up to a dozen . .
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Original:  Also said to be on the run are Gaddafi's Europe minister and head of intelligence  .
Revised:  Gaddafi's Europe minister and head of intelligence .
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Original:  This latest breakthrough follows the defection of Libya's foreign minister, Moussa Koussa , who abandoned Gaddafi's regime and entered the United Kingdom on Wednesday
Revised:  This latest breakthrough follows the defection of Libya's foreign minister, , who abandoned Gaddafi's regime and entered the United Kingdom on Wednesday
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Original:  They don't need a bad situation made much, much worse by Julia Gillard's carbon tax.  
Revised:  They don't need a bad situation made much, much worse by Julia Gillard's carbon tax. " 
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Original: Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard Treasury documents released  under the Freedom of Information (FOI) act today reveal that Australians could face up to an A $863 rise in household costs per annum if the government proceeds with putting a tax on carbon emissions.
Revised: Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard Treasury documents released today under the Freedom of Information (FOI) act today reveal that Australians could face up to an A $863 rise in household costs per annum if the government proceeds with putting a tax on carbon emissions.
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Original: Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard Treasury documents released  under the Freedom of Information (FOI) act today reveal that Australians could face up to an A $863 rise in household costs per annum if the government proceeds with putting a tax on carbon emissions.
Revised: Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard Treasury documents released under the Freedom of Information (FOI) act reveal that Australians could face up to an A $863 rise in household costs per annum if the government proceeds with putting a tax on carbon emissions.
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