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Original:  He was recommended by Sir James Hussey, his master at Magdalen, as tutor to William, the son of William Cavendish, Baron of Hardwick (and later Earl of Devonshire), and began a lifelong  connection with that family.
Revised:  <ref> connection with that family.
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Original:  Hobbes rejected one of the most famous theses of Aristotle ’ s politics, namely that human beings are naturally suited to life in a polis and do not fully realize their natures until they exercise the role of citizen.
Revised:  Hobbes rejected one of the most famous theses of Aristotle ' s politics, namely that human beings are naturally suited to life in a polis and do not fully realize their natures until they exercise the role of citizen.
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Original:   The principal, John Wilkinson, was a Puritan and had some influence on Hobbes.
Revised:  </ref> The principal, John Wilkinson, was a Puritan and had some influence on Hobbes.
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Original: Biography Early life Thomas Hobbes waog/NewFiles/hobbes.html |work=The Galileo Project |title=Hobbes, Thomas |publisher=Rice University |year=1995 |first=Al Van |last=Helden}}</ref> The principal, John Wilkinson, was a Puritan and had some influence on Hobbes.
Revised: Biography balls Thomas Hobbes waog/NewFiles/hobbes.html |work=The Galileo Project |title=Hobbes, Thomas |publisher=Rice University |year=1995 |first=Al Van |last=Helden}}</ref> The principal, John Wilkinson, was a Puritan and had some influence on Hobbes.
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Original: Clarence and Carl Aguirre (born April 21, 2002) are former conjoined twins born in Silay City , Philippines.
Revised: Clarence and Carl Aguirre (born April 21, 2002) are former conjoined twins born in Silay , Philippines.
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Original: Clarence and Carl Aguirre (born April 21, 2002) are former conjoined twins born in Silay, Philippines .
Revised: Clarence and Carl Aguirre (born April 21, 2002) are former conjoined twins born in Manila .
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Original:  All of these operations were performed at Children's Hospital at Montefiore in The Bronx, New York by a team led by James T . Goodrich, a pediatric neurosurgeon, David A. Staffenberg, a plastic surgeon.
Revised:  All of these operations were performed at Children's Hospital at Montefiore in The Bronx, New York by a team led by James T . Goodrich, plastic surgeon David A. Staffenberg, a plastic surgeon.
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Original:  They received most of their  post-operative rehabilitation  at Blythedale Children's Hospital in Valhalla, New York.
Revised:  They received most of their Most of the post-operative rehabilitation at Blythedale Children's Hospital in Valhalla, New York.
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Original:  They received most of their  post-operative rehabilitation  at Blythedale Children's Hospital in Valhalla, New York.
Revised:  They received most of their post-operative rehabilitation took place at Blythedale Children's Hospital in Valhalla, New York.
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Original:   By December 2005, Clarence could walk short distances unassisted, and Carl could walk with a walker.
Revised:  By December 2005, Clarence could walk short distances and Carl could walk with a walker.
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Original:  After World War II, an improved form of black-and-white TV broadcasting became popular in the United Kingdom and United States, and television sets became commonplace in homes, businesses, and institutions.
Revised:  After World War II, an improved form of black-and-white television broadcasting became popular in the United Kingdom and United States, and television sets became commonplace in homes, businesses, and institutions.
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Original:  The area of the disk outlined in black shows the region scanned.
Revised:  The area of the disk outlined in black displays the region scanned.
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Original:  In the receiver, a type of Kerr cell modulated the light and a series of variously angled mirrors attached to the edge of a rotating disc scanned the modulated beam onto the display screen.
Revised:  In the receiver, a type of Kerr cell modulated the light and a series of differently angled mirrors attached to the edge of a rotating disc scanned the modulated beam onto the display screen.
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Original:  The thallium sulphide (Thalofide) cell, developed by Theodore Case in the USA , detected the light reflected from the subject and converted it into a proportional electrical signal.
Revised:  The thallium sulphide (Thalofide) cell, developed by Theodore Case in the U.S. , detected the light reflected from the subject and converted it into a proportional electrical signal.
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Original:  Baird's mechanical system reached a peak of 240-lines of resolution on BBC television broadcasts in 1936, though the mechanical system did not scan the televised scene directly.
Revised:  Baird's mechanical system reached a peak of 240-lines of resolution on BBC telecasts in 1936, though the mechanical system did not scan the televised scene directly.
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Original:  An American inventor, Charles Francis Jenkins, also pioneered the television.
Revised:  A U.S. inventor, Charles Francis Jenkins, also pioneered the television.
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Original:  The advancement of all-electronic television (including image dissectors and other camera tubes and cathode ray tubes for the reproducer) marked the beginning of the end for mechanical systems as the dominant form of television.
Revised:  The advancement of all-electronic television (including image dissectors and other camera tubes and cathode ray tubes for the reproducer) marked the start of the end for mechanical systems as the dominant form of television.
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Original:  The last mechanical television broadcasts ended in 1939 at stations run by a handful of public universities in the United States.
Revised:  The last mechanical telecasts ended in 1939 at stations run by a handful of public universities in the United States.
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Original:  The last mechanical television broadcasts ended in 1939 at stations run by a handful of public universities in the United States.
Revised:  The last mechanical television broadcasts ended in 1939 at stations run by a lot of public universities in the United States.
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Original:  In 1897, English physicist J. J. Thomson was able, in his three famous experiments, to deflect cathode rays, a fundamental function of the modern cathode ray tube (CRT).
Revised:  In 1897, English physicist J. J. Thomson was able, in his three well-known experiments, to deflect cathode rays, a fundamental function of the modern cathode ray tube (CRT).
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Original:  The device was first described in a patent application he filed in Hungary in March 1926 for a television system he dubbed "Radioskop".
Revised:  The device was first described in a patent application he filed in Hungary in March 1926 for a television system he called "Radioskop".
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Original:  , 48 million are sold each year at an average price of $ 460 and size of . Getting TV programming shown to the public can happen in many different ways.
Revised:  , 48 million are sold each year at an average price of $ 460 and size of . Getting TV programming shown to the public can happen in many other ways.
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Original:  First-run programming is increasing on subscription services outside the US , but few domestically produced programs are syndicated on domestic free-to-air (FTA) elsewhere.
Revised:  First-run programming is increasing on subscription services outside of the United States , but few domestically produced programs are syndicated on domestic free-to-air (FTA) elsewhere.
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Original:  Unlike the US , repeat FTA screenings of an FTA network program usually only occur on that network.
Revised:  Unlike United States , repeat FTA screenings of an FTA network program usually only occur on that network.
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Original:  Also, affiliates rarely buy or produce non-network programming that is not centered on local programming.
Revised:  Also, affiliates rarely buy or produce non-network programming that is not focused on local programming.
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Original:  Popular culture entertainment genres include action-oriented shows such as police, crime, detective dramas, horror, or thriller shows.
Revised:  Pop culture entertainment genres include action-oriented shows such as police, crime, detective dramas, horror, or thriller shows.
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Original:  Science fiction shows can fall into either the drama or action category, depending on whether they emphasize philosophical questions or high adventure.
Revised:  Sci-fi series can fall into either the drama or action category, depending on whether they emphasize philosophical questions or high adventure.
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Original:  Comedy is a popular genre which includes situation comedy (sitcom) and animated shows for the adult demographic such as  South Park.
Revised:  Comedy is a popular genre which includes situation comedy (sitcom) and animated series for the adult demographic such as South Park.
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Original:  Comedy is a popular genre which includes situation comedy (sitcom) and animated shows for the adult demographic such as  South Park.
Revised:  Comedy is a popular genre which includes situation comedy (sitcom) and animated shows for the adult demographic such as Comedy Central's South Park.
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Original:  Reality TV shows "regular" people (i.e., not actors) facing unusual challenges or experiences ranging from arrest by police officers (COPS) to significant weight loss (The Biggest Loser).
Revised:  Reality television series "regular" people (i.e., not actors) facing unusual challenges or experiences ranging from arrest by police officers (COPS) to significant weight loss (The Biggest Loser).
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Original:  Around the globe, broadcast TV is financed by government, advertising, licensing (a form of tax), subscription, or any combination of these.
Revised:  Around the world, broadcast television is financed by government, advertising, licensing (a form of tax), subscription, or any combination of these.
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Original:  To protect revenues, subscription TV channels are usually encrypted to ensure that only subscribers receive the decryption codes to see the signal.
Revised:  To protect revenues, subscription television channels are usually encrypted to ensure that only subscribers receive the decryption codes to see the signal.
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Original:  Many TV networks and stations sell blocks of broadcast time to advertisers ("sponsors") to fund their programming.
Revised:  Many television networks and stations sell blocks of broadcast time to advertisers ("sponsors") to fund their programming.
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Original:  The first TV ad broadcast in the UK was on ITV on 22 September 1955, advertising Gibbs SR toothpaste.
Revised:  The first TV ad broadcast in the U.K. was on ITV on 22 September 1955, advertising Gibbs SR toothpaste.
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Original:  Perhaps due to the quiz show scandals in the 1950s, networks shifted to the magazine concept, introducing advertising breaks with multiple advertisers.
Revised:  Perhaps due to the quiz show scandals in the 1950s, networks shifted to the magazine concept, introducing advertising breaks with other advertisers.
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Original:  US advertising rates are determined primarily by Nielsen ratings.
Revised:  U.S. advertising rates are determined primarily by Nielsen ratings.
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Original: The abbreviation "TV " is from 1948.
Revised: The abbreviation TV is from 1948.
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Original:  The slang term "telly " is more common in the UK.
Revised:  The slang term telly is more common in the UK.
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Original:  The slang term "the tube " or the "boob tube " derives from the bulky cathode ray tube used on most TVs until the advent of flat-screen TVs.
Revised:  The slang term the tube or the boob tube derives from the bulky cathode ray tube used on most TVs until the advent of flat-screen TVs.
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Original:  A standard television set is consisted of multiple internal electronic circuits, including a tuner for receiving and decoding broadcast signals.
Revised:  A standard television set consists of multiple internal electronic circuits, including a tuner for receiving and decoding broadcast signals.
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Original: National Association of Broadcasters Association of Commercial Television in Europe The Encyclopedia of Television at the Museum of Broadcast Communications Television's History – The First 75 Years Collection Profile – Television at the Canada Science and Technology Museum The Evolution of TV, A Brief History of TV Technology in Japan – NHK (Japan Broadcasting Corporation) Worldwide Television Standards Category:Advertising by medium .
Revised:  Category:Advertising by medium .
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Original: Technology The Impella Device is a generational extension of the Intra aortic balloon pump (IABP) in addressing cardiogenic shock.
Revised:  The Impella Device is a generational extension of the Intra aortic balloon pump (IABP) in addressing cardiogenic shock.
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Original:  The word is derived from the Spanish verb "hacer" or its gerund "haciendo", which means 'to make' and 'making' respectively, and were largely business enterprises consisting of various money making ventures including raising farm animals and maintaining orchards.
Revised:  The word is derived from the Spanish verb "hacer" or its gerund "haciendo", which means 'to make' and 'making' respectively, and were largely business enterprises consisting of various money-making ventures including raising farm animals and maintaining orchards.
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Original:  or ), in  the colonies of the Spanish Empire, is an estate (or finca), similar to a Roman latifundium.
Revised:  or ), in Spain and the colonies of the Spanish Empire, is an estate (or finca), similar to a Roman latifundium.
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Original:  or ), in Spain and the colonies of the Spanish Empire, is an estate (or finca), similar to a Roman latifundium.
Revised:  or ), in the colonies of the Spanish Empire, is an estate (or finca), similar to a Roman latifundium.
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Original:  In rural areas, the wealthiest people typically affect the style of the old hacendados even though their wealth these days derives from more capitalistic enterprises .
Revised:  In rural areas, the wealthiest people typically affect the style of the old hacendados .
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Original:  In a number of places, the economy of the 18th century was largely a barter system, with little specie circulated on the hacienda.
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Original:  In Argentina and elsewhere, a second, international, money-based economy developed independently of the haciendas, which sank into rural poverty.
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Original: Condurrite is a name given to a mixture of Cuprite, Domeykite and Tenorite .
Revised: Condurrite is a name given to a mixture of cuprite, domeykite and tenorite .
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Original: Playing style He is sometimes referred to as "Mr. 360" due to his ability to play shots all around the wicket, and as "Superman" due to his acrobatic fielding.
Revised: Playing style He is also referred to as "Mr. 360" due to his ability to play shots all around the wicket, and as "Superman" due to his acrobatic fielding.
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Original: Playing style He is also referred to as "Mr. 360" due to his ability to play shots all around the wicket, and as "Superman" due to his acrobatic fielding.
Revised: Playing style He is sometimes referred to as "Mr. 360" due to his ability to play shots all around the wicket, and as "Superman" due to his acrobatic fielding.
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Original:  Beginning on 21 May 2021, the Karenni Army, along with their newly-constituted ally the Karenni People's Defense Force, engaged in battles with the Tatmadaw across several towns in Kayah State, leaving dozens URL
Revised:  Beginning on 21 May 2021, the Karenni Army, along with their newly-constituted ally the Karenni People's Defense Force, engaged in battles with the Tatmadaw across several towns in Kayah State, leaving dozens dead.
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Original: History The term Critical Design was first used in Anthony Dunne’s book Hertzian Tales (1999) and further developed in Design Noir: The Secret Life of Electronic Objects (2001) .
Revised: Definition A Critical Design object challenges an audience's preconceptions, provoking new ways of thinking about the object, its use, and the surrounding culture .
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Original:  Critical design builds on this attitude by creatively critiquing concepts and ideologies using fabricated artifacts to embody commentaries around everything from  the #MeToo Movement to consumer culture.
Revised:  Critical design builds on this attitude by creatively critiquing concepts and ideologies using fabricated artifacts to embody commentaries around everything from consumer culture to the #MeToo Movement to consumer culture.
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Original:  A Critical Design object challenges an audience's preconceptions, provoking new ways of thinking about the object, its use, and the surrounding environment.
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Original:  In recent years FABRICA, a communication research center owned by Italian fashion giant Benetton Group, has been actively involved in producing provocative imagery and critical design projects.
Revised:  FABRICA, a communication research center owned by Italian fashion giant Benetton Group, has been actively involved in producing provocative imagery and critical design projects.
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Original: In addition, critical design object has a lot of potentials to contribute to testing ideas during the process of the development of new technology.
Revised: In addition, critical design objects have a lot of potentials to contribute to testing ideas during the process of the development of new technology.
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Original: In addition, critical design object has a lot of potentials to contribute to testing ideas during the process of the development of new technology.
Revised: In addition, critical design object has a lot of potential to contribute to testing ideas during the process of the development of new technology.
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Original:  Several young artists who have produced critical design projects at FABRICA in recent years are Erik Ravello (Cuba), Yianni Hill (Australia), Marian Grabmayer (Austria), Priya Khatri (India), Andy Rementer (United States), and An Namyoung (South Korea).
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Original:  The work has been shown at Electronic Language International Festival, Games, Learning Society Conference, Conference on Human Factors in Computing Systems among other notable events.
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Original: Critical design takes a critical theory based approach to design .
Revised: Critical design makes aspects of future physically present to provoke a reaction. "Critical design is critical thought translated into materiality. It is about thinking through design rather than through words and using the language and structure of design to engage people . .
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Original:  In order words, the child learns the contents of the society, things that are related to their own and the opposite sex, and incorporates it into their gender schemas.
Revised:  In other words, the child learns the contents of the society, things that are related to their own and the opposite sex, and incorporates it into their gender schemas.
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Original:  GID is accompanied with a distress that the individual cannot change their sex and a strong rejection for sex-typical behaviours .
Revised:  GID is accompanied with a distress that the individual cannot change their sex and a strong rejection for sex-typical behaviors .
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Original:  Belmont, CA: Wadsworth This process is extremely important for a child's social and personality development because it largely impacts the child's understanding of expected social behaviour and influences social judgments.
Revised:  Belmont, CA: Wadsworth This process is important for a child's social and personality development because it largely impacts the child's understanding of expected social behaviour and influences social judgments.
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Original:  Belmont, CA: Wadsworth This process is extremely important for a child's social and personality development because it largely impacts the child's understanding of expected social behaviour and influences social judgments.
Revised:  Belmont, CA: Wadsworth This process is extremely important for a child's social and personality development because it largely impacts the child's understanding of expected social behavior and influences social judgments.
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Original:  Gender identity Given the definition, once the child is aware of their gender they will start to behave in gender roles that their same-sex models would normally adopt .
Revised:  Gender identity Once aware of ones gender identity, the child will start to behave in gender roles that their same-sex models would normally adopt .
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Original:  Gender identity Given the definition, once the child is aware of their gender they will start to behave in gender roles that their same-sex models would normally adopt .
Revised:  Gender identity Given the definition, once the child is aware of their gender they will start to behave in gender roles normally adopted by their same-sex models would normally adopt .
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Original:  Gender identity Given the definition, once the child is aware of their gender they will start to behave in gender roles that their same-sex models would normally adopt .
Revised:  Gender identity Given the definition, once the child is aware of their gender they will start to behave in gender roles that their same-sex models .
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Original:  Freud’s psychoanalytic theory Sigmund Freud believed that as a child progresses through each of the different stages in psychosexual development, during the third year of the child's life, genitals are thought to become active.
Revised:  Freud’s psychoanalytic theory Sigmund Freud believed that children go through stages of psychosexual development. In the third year of the child's life, genitals are thought to become active.
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Original:  Furthermore, the girl's affection towards her father will also influence her to emulate her mother's feminine qualities and eventually adopt more gender-typed behaviours .
Revised:  Furthermore, the girl's affection towards her father will also influence her to emulate her mother's feminine qualities and eventually adopt more gender-typed behaviors .
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Original: Gender typing is the  process by which a child becomes aware of their gender and thus behaves accordingly by adopting values and attributes of members of the sex that they identify as their own.
Revised: Gender typing is the process by which a child is thought to become aware of their gender and thus behaves accordingly by adopting values and attributes of members of the sex that they identify as their own.
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Original: Gender typing is the  process by which a child becomes aware of their gender and thus behaves accordingly by adopting values and attributes of members of the sex that they identify as their own.
Revised: Gender typing is the process by which a child becomes aware of their gender , inasmuch as behaving accordingly by adopting values and attributes of members of the sex that they identify as their own.
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