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Original: Jerusalem, or on Religious Power and Judaism () is a book written by Moses Mendelssohn, which was first published in 1783 – the same year , when the Prussian officer Christian Wilhelm von Dohm published the second part of his Mémoire Concerning the amelioration of the civil status of the Jews.;
Revised: Jerusalem, or on Religious Power and Judaism () is a book written by Moses Mendelssohn, which was first published in 1783 – the same year when the Prussian officer Christian Wilhelm von Dohm published the second part of his Mémoire Concerning the amelioration of the civil status of the Jews.;
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Original:  During the 1770s  Mendelssohn was frequently asked to act as a mediator by Jews in Switzerland and Alsace – and once Lavater supported Mendelssohn's intervention.
Revised:  During the 1770s , Mendelssohn was frequently asked to act as a mediator by Jews in Switzerland and Alsace – and once Lavater supported Mendelssohn's intervention.
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Original:  About 1780  there was another antisemitic intrigue in Alsace, when François Hell accused the Jewish population to exhaust the peasants.
Revised:  About 1780 , there was another antisemitic intrigue in Alsace, when François Hell accused the Jewish population to exhaust the peasants.
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Original: Moses Mendelssohn was a highly educated scholar and teacher  who devoted much effort to the German translation of classical Hellenic and Roman philosophers and poets as a young man, and he became a very famous and influential philosopher of Haskalah.
Revised: Moses Mendelssohn was a highly educated scholar and teacher , who devoted much effort to the German translation of classical Hellenic and Roman philosophers and poets as a young man, and he became a very famous and influential philosopher of Haskalah.
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Original:  From this libertarian point of view  he drew nearer to Thomas Hobbes' scenario of the "war of every man against every man" (bellum omnium contra omnes) which Hobbes had described as the "natural condition of mankind" in his book Leviathan:
Revised:  From this libertarian point of view , he drew nearer to Thomas Hobbes' scenario of the "war of every man against every man" (bellum omnium contra omnes) which Hobbes had described as the "natural condition of mankind" in his book Leviathan:
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Original:  From this natural human condition  which was banned by a religious fear of God (in Bosse's frontispiece made up by a crowd of people), Mendelssohn defined the role of the state (the left column under the sword) and the role of the religion (the right column under the crook) and the way, how they both had to be brought into harmony:
Revised:  From this natural human condition , which was banned by a religious fear of God (in Bosse's frontispiece made up by a crowd of people), Mendelssohn defined the role of the state (the left column under the sword) and the role of the religion (the right column under the crook) and the way, how they both had to be brought into harmony:
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Original: Locke's proposed relation between a tolerant state and the humans  who were associated to it as citizens, had to be granted by a social contract.
Revised: Locke's proposed relation between a tolerant state and the humans , who were associated to it as citizens, had to be granted by a social contract.
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Original:  Moses Mendelssohn followed a simple judicial advice, when he described the subject of this contract as "perfect" and "imperfect" "rights" and "responsibilities": In his political theory  Moses Mendelssohn had to criticize the present conditions of the Prussian state, and he did without mentioning it, partly for reasons of censorship and partly for rhetorical reasons.
Revised:  Moses Mendelssohn followed a simple judicial advice, when he described the subject of this contract as "perfect" and "imperfect" "rights" and "responsibilities": In his political theory , Moses Mendelssohn had to criticize the present conditions of the Prussian state, and he did without mentioning it, partly for reasons of censorship and partly for rhetorical reasons.
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Original:  This was his polite way to say that its regent was centuries behind his own philosophy: In consequence  the second part on religious power had to criticize the present conditions of that religion which he always had to defend during his life.
Revised:  This was his polite way to say that its regent was centuries behind his own philosophy: In consequence , the second part on religious power had to criticize the present conditions of that religion which he always had to defend during his life.
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Original:  His own cynical and refusing attitude concerning religion was widespread among his contemporaries  and it was related with the own biography and a personal experience full of disappointments and conflicts within the family.
Revised:  His own cynical and refusing attitude concerning religion was widespread among his contemporaries , and it was related with the own biography and a personal experience full of disappointments and conflicts within the family.
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Original:  His own cynical and refusing attitude concerning religion was widespread among his contemporaries  and it was related with the own biography and a personal experience full of disappointments and conflicts within the family.
Revised:  His own cynical and refusing attitude concerning religion was widespread among his contemporaries and it was related to his biography and a personal experience full of disappointments and conflicts within the family.
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Original: The Georgetown Lighthouse was first built by the Dutch in 1817 and then rebuilt in 1830 to help guide ships into the Demerara River from the Atlantic Ocean.
Revised: T===e Georgetown Lighthouse was first built by the Dutch in 1817 and then rebuilt in 1830 to help guide ships into the Demerara River from the Atlantic Ocean.
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Original:  Category:Lighthouses completed in 1830 Category:Towers completed in 1830 Category:Georgetown, Guyana Category:History of Guyana Category:Lighthouses in Guyana Category:1830 establishments in British Guia
Revised:  Category:Lighthouses completed in 1830 Category:Towers completed in 1830 Category:Georgetown, Guyana Category:History of Guyana Category:Lighthouses in Guyana Category:1830 estblishments in British Guia
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Original: T===e Georgetown Lighthouse was first built by the Dutch in 1817 and then rebuilt in 1830 to help guide ships into the Demerara River from the Atlantic Ocean.
Revised: The Georgetown Lighthouse was first built by the Dutch in 1817 and then rebuilt in 1830 to help guide ships into the Demerara River from the Atlantic Ocean.
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Original:  Category:Lighthouses completed in 1830 Category:Towers completed in 1830 Category:Georgetown, Guyana Category:History of Guyana Category:Lighthouses in Guyana Category:1830 estblishments in British Guia
Revised:  Category:Lighthouses completed in 1830 Category:Towers completed in 1830 Category:Georgetown, Guyana Category:History of Guyana Category:Lighthouses in Guyana Category:1830 establishments in British Guia
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Original: A revolt "so well hidden that it seem[s] inexistent ", it is a quest "to extend the boundaries of official tolerance, either by adopting a line considered by authorities to be ideologically suspect, or by highlighting certain contemporary social problems, or both."
Revised: A revolt "so well hidden that it seem[s] nonexistent ", it is a quest "to extend the boundaries of official tolerance, either by adopting a line considered by authorities to be ideologically suspect, or by highlighting certain contemporary social problems, or both."
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Original: A revolt "so well hidden that it seem s nonexistent", it is a quest "to extend the boundaries of official tolerance, either by adopting a line considered by authorities to be ideologically suspect, or by highlighting certain contemporary social problems, or both."
Revised: A revolt "so well hidden that it s nonexistent", it is a quest "to extend the boundaries of official tolerance, either by adopting a line considered by authorities to be ideologically suspect, or by highlighting certain contemporary social problems, or both."
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Original: A revolt "so well hidden that it seem s nonexistent", it is a quest "to extend the boundaries of official tolerance, either by adopting a line considered by authorities to be ideologically suspect, or by highlighting certain contemporary social problems, or both."
Revised: A revolt "so well hidden that it seem seems nonexistent", it is a quest "to extend the boundaries of official tolerance, either by adopting a line considered by authorities to be ideologically suspect, or by highlighting certain contemporary social problems, or both."
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Original: Tichkematse ( also called "Squint Eyes" or Quchkeimus ) (1857-1932) was a Cheyenne who worked for the Smithsonian Institution  between 1879 and 1881.
Revised: Tichkematse , also called "Squint Eyes" or Quchkeimus ) (1857-1932) was a Cheyenne who worked for the Smithsonian Institution between 1879 and 1881.
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Original: Tichkematse ( also called "Squint Eyes" or Quchkeimus ) (1857-1932) was a Cheyenne who worked for the Smithsonian Institution  between 1879 and 1881.
Revised: Tichkematse ( also called "Squint Eyes" or Quchkeimus (1857-1932) was a Cheyenne who worked for the Smithsonian Institution between 1879 and 1881.
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Original: Tichkematse ( also called "Squint Eyes" or Quchkeimus ) (1857-1932) was a Cheyenne who worked for the Smithsonian Institution  between 1879 and 1881.
Revised: Tichkematse ( also called "Squint Eyes" or Quchkeimus ) (1857-1932) was a Cheyenne who worked for the Smithsonian Institution in Washington, DC between 1879 and 1881.
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Original:  He is known for his ledger art, for his work  as a collector of bird and mammal specimens  and Cheyenne crafts , and for his work with Frank Hamilton Cushing documenting Indian sign language .
Revised:  He is known for his ledger art, for his work as a collector of bird and mammal specimens , and Cheyenne crafts , and for his work with Frank Hamilton Cushing documenting Indian sign language .
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Original:  the received signal is degraded by natural or man-made interference (such as jamming signals or co-channel interference), (c) an interfering signal can reconfigure the network, and/or (d) an adversary threatens successful communications, in which case radio signals may be encrypted in order to deny the adversary an intelligible message, traffic flow information, network information, or automatic link establishment (ALE) control information. </b>
Revised:  the received signal is degraded by natural or man-made interference (such as jamming signals or co-channel interference), (c) an interfering signal can reconfigure the network, and/or (d) an adversary threatens successful communications, in which case radio signals may be encrypted in order to deny the adversary an intelligible message, traffic flow information, network information, or automatic link establishment (ALE) control information. 
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Original:  In radiocommunications , an environment that is under the influence of extrinsic factors that degrade communications integrity, such as when (a)
Revised:  In radio communications , an environment that is under the influence of extrinsic factors that degrade communications integrity, such as when (a)
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Original:  Source: from Federal Standard 1037C
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Original:  the benign communications medium is disturbed by natural or man-made events (such as an intentional nuclear burst), (b)
Revised:  the beginning communications medium is disturbed by natural or man-made events (such as an intentional nuclear burst), (b)
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Original:  <nowiki> Originally a flight commander, he rose up in the chain of command, and by the end of the war he was a squadron commander with the rank of Major, having completed an estimated 250 missions in the Il-2.
Revised:  Originally a flight commander, he rose up in the chain of command, and by the end of the war he was a squadron commander with the rank of Major, having completed an estimated 250 missions in the Il-2.
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Original:  1995 deaths Category:
Revised:  1987 deaths Category:
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Original:  Order of Lenin (23 February 1945) Three Orders of the Red Banner (20 August 1943, 23 February 1944, and 2 November 1944) Order of Bogdan Khmelnitsky (2 March 1943) Order of Alexander Nevsky (14 July 1944) Two Orders of the Patriotic War 1st Class (2 April 1945 and 11 March 1985) Order of the Red Banner of Labour (31 August 1971) Three Orders of the Red Star (24 June 1943, 22 February 1955, and 30 December 1956) Medal "For Courage" (30 April 1943) campaign and commemorative medals
Revised:  Order of Lenin (23 February 1945) Three Orders of the Red Banner (20 August 1943, 23 February 1944, and 2 November 1944) Order of Bogdan Khmelnitsky (2 March 1943) Order of Alexander Nevsky (14 July 1944) Two Orders of the Patriotic War 1st Class (2 April 1945 and 11 March 1985) Order of the Red Banner of Labour (31 August 1971) Three Orders of the Red Star (24 June 1943, 22 February 1955, and 30 December 1956) Medal "For Courage" (30 April 1943) campaign and jubilee medals
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Original: People from Ufa Governorate Category:Soviet Air Force officers Category:Recipients of the Medal "For Courage" (Russia) Category:Recipients of the Order of Alexander Nevsky Category:Recipients of the Order of Bogdan Khmelnitsky (Soviet Union), 3rd class Category:Recipients of the Order of Lenin Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Banner Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Banner of Labour Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Star Category:Soviet World War II pilo
Revised: People from Ufa Governorate Category:Soviet Air Force officers Category:Recipients of the Medal "For Courage" (Russia) Category:Recipients of the Order of Alexander Nevsky Category:Recipients of the Order of Bogdan Khmelnitsky (Soviet Union), 3rd class Category:Recipients of the Order of Lenin Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Banner Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Banner of Labour Category:Recipients of the Order of the Red Star Category:Soviet World War II pilots Category:Deaths from cancer Category:Deaths from cancer in the Soviet Uni
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Original:  He has coached most of football clubs in India like  Dempo S.C., Salgaocar F.C., Mohun Bagan A.C., Churchill Brothers S.C., Chirag United Club Kerala, Josco FC etc.
Revised:  He has managed most of football clubs in India like Dempo S.C., Salgaocar F.C., Mohun Bagan A.C., Churchill Brothers S.C., Chirag United Club Kerala, Josco FC etc.
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Original:  or just "the Principles") is a document which attempts to “ clarify how international human rights law applies in the current digital environment ” .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Preface, May 2014 Communications Surveillance(Mass Surveillance of Communication) conflicts with a number of International Human Rights, mainly that of Privacy.
Revised:  or just "the Principles") is a document which attempts to " clarify how international human rights law applies in the current digital environment ” .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Preface, May 2014 Communications Surveillance(Mass Surveillance of Communication) conflicts with a number of International Human Rights, mainly that of Privacy.
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Original:  or just "the Principles") is a document which attempts to “ clarify how international human rights law applies in the current digital environment ” .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Preface, May 2014 Communications Surveillance(Mass Surveillance of Communication) conflicts with a number of International Human Rights, mainly that of Privacy.
Revised:  or just "the Principles") is a document which attempts to “ clarify how international human rights law applies in the current digital environment " .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Preface, May 2014 Communications Surveillance(Mass Surveillance of Communication) conflicts with a number of International Human Rights, mainly that of Privacy.
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Original: Frank La Rue, “ Report of the Special Rapporteur to the Human Rights Council on the implications of States’ surveillance of communications on the exercise of the human rights to privacy and to freedom of opinion and expression ” , 2013, A.HRC.23.40 EN In July 2013 the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, emphasized the importance of applying human right standards and democratic safeguards to surveillance and law enforcement activities:
Revised: Frank La Rue, " Report of the Special Rapporteur to the Human Rights Council on the implications of States’ surveillance of communications on the exercise of the human rights to privacy and to freedom of opinion and expression ” , 2013, A.HRC.23.40 EN In July 2013 the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, emphasized the importance of applying human right standards and democratic safeguards to surveillance and law enforcement activities:
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Original: Frank La Rue, “ Report of the Special Rapporteur to the Human Rights Council on the implications of States’ surveillance of communications on the exercise of the human rights to privacy and to freedom of opinion and expression ” , 2013, A.HRC.23.40 EN In July 2013 the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, emphasized the importance of applying human right standards and democratic safeguards to surveillance and law enforcement activities:
Revised: Frank La Rue, “ Report of the Special Rapporteur to the Human Rights Council on the implications of States’ surveillance of communications on the exercise of the human rights to privacy and to freedom of opinion and expression " , 2013, A.HRC.23.40 EN In July 2013 the United Nations High Commissioner for Human Rights, emphasized the importance of applying human right standards and democratic safeguards to surveillance and law enforcement activities:
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Original:  “ While concerns about national security and criminal activity may justify the exceptional and narrowly-tailored use of surveillance programmes, surveillance without adequate safeguards to protect the right to privacy actually risk impacting negatively on the enjoyment of human rights and fundamental freedoms.
Revised:  " While concerns about national security and criminal activity may justify the exceptional and narrowly-tailored use of surveillance programmes, surveillance without adequate safeguards to protect the right to privacy actually risk impacting negatively on the enjoyment of human rights and fundamental freedoms.
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Original:  ” Mass surveillance:Pillay urges respect for right to privacy and protection of individuals revealing human rights violations The preamble of the document recognizes that Communications Surveillance interferes with the Right to privacy, therefore can only be used when it is prescribed by law, necessary to achieve a legitimate aim, and proportionate to the aim pursued.
Revised:  " Mass surveillance:Pillay urges respect for right to privacy and protection of individuals revealing human rights violations The preamble of the document recognizes that Communications Surveillance interferes with the Right to privacy, therefore can only be used when it is prescribed by law, necessary to achieve a legitimate aim, and proportionate to the aim pursued.
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Original: Frank La Rue, “ Report of the Special Rapporteur to the Human Rights Council on the implications of States’ surveillance of communications on the exercise of the human rights to privacy and to freedom of opinion and expression ” , 2013, A.HRC.23.40 EN The view of the document is that existing human rights law has not kept up with the progression of technology.
Revised: Frank La Rue, " Report of the Special Rapporteur to the Human Rights Council on the implications of States’ surveillance of communications on the exercise of the human rights to privacy and to freedom of opinion and expression ” , 2013, A.HRC.23.40 EN The view of the document is that existing human rights law has not kept up with the progression of technology.
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Original: Frank La Rue, “ Report of the Special Rapporteur to the Human Rights Council on the implications of States’ surveillance of communications on the exercise of the human rights to privacy and to freedom of opinion and expression ” , 2013, A.HRC.23.40 EN The view of the document is that existing human rights law has not kept up with the progression of technology.
Revised: Frank La Rue, “ Report of the Special Rapporteur to the Human Rights Council on the implications of States’ surveillance of communications on the exercise of the human rights to privacy and to freedom of opinion and expression " , 2013, A.HRC.23.40 EN The view of the document is that existing human rights law has not kept up with the progression of technology.
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Original:  The preamble states that the threat to these rights combined with the increase in popularity of using communications content and metadata that states are not placing “ sufficient restrictions on how they can be subsequently used by States ” .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance,
Revised:  The preamble states that the threat to these rights combined with the increase in popularity of using communications content and metadata that states are not placing " sufficient restrictions on how they can be subsequently used by States ” .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance,
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Original:  The preamble states that the threat to these rights combined with the increase in popularity of using communications content and metadata that states are not placing “ sufficient restrictions on how they can be subsequently used by States ” .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance,
Revised:  The preamble states that the threat to these rights combined with the increase in popularity of using communications content and metadata that states are not placing “ sufficient restrictions on how they can be subsequently used by States " .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance,
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Original:  The principles are stated to “ articulate the duties and obligations of States when engaging in Communications Surveillance ” .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Scope of Application, May 2014 In October 2013, The Principles were promoted in a brief filed before the President’s Review Group on Intelligence and Communications Technologies.
Revised:  The principles are stated to " articulate the duties and obligations of States when engaging in Communications Surveillance ” .Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communications Surveillance, at Scope of Application, May 2014 In October 2013, The Principles were promoted in a brief filed before the President’s Review Group on Intelligence and Communications Technologies.
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