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Original: In a report by the human rights council rapporteur, Swiss senator Dick Marty , made public the 42-member nation's preliminary conclusions regarding CIA activity on European Union soil.
Revised: In a report by the human rights council rapporteur, Swiss senator Dick Marty made public the 42-member nation's preliminary conclusions regarding CIA activity on European Union soil.
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Original:  "There is a great deal of coherent, convergent evidence pointing to the existence of a system of 'relocation' or 'outsourcing of torture'," and also stated that "It is highly unlikely that European governments, or at least their intelligence services, were unaware."
Revised:  "There is a great deal of coherent, convergent evidence pointing to the existence of a system of 'relocation' or 'outsourcing of torture'," while stating that, "It is highly unlikely that European governments, or at least their intelligence services, were unaware."
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Original:  "There is a great deal of coherent, convergent evidence pointing to the existence of a system of 'relocation' or 'outsourcing of torture'," while stating that, "It is highly unlikely that European governments, or at least their intelligence services, were unaware."
Revised:  "There is a great deal of coherent, convergent evidence pointing to the existence of a system of 'relocation' or 'outsourcing of torture'," the report stated while further noting that, "It is highly unlikely that European governments, or at least their intelligence services, were unaware."
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Original: An anti-terrorist researcher for Human Rights Watch, John Swift, said;
Revised: A researcher for Human Rights Watch, John Swift, said;
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Original:  US State Department spokesman Sean McCormack has rejected the report and stated that it was an example of the “ same old reports wrapped up in some new rhetoric.
Revised:  US State Department spokesman Sean McCormack has rejected the report and stated that it was an example of the " same old reports wrapped up in some new rhetoric.
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Original:  ” US Department of Homeland Security secretary Michael Chertoff has stated regarding the US government that "the government acts in accordance with the law and with respect to the sovereignty of host countries in which it operates, ” and further stated that "The authorities are free to investigate what they want to investigate but we should not allow ourselves to be distracted from the need to identify, prevent and protect against terrorist acts of violence."
Revised:  " US Department of Homeland Security secretary Michael Chertoff has stated regarding the US government that "the government acts in accordance with the law and with respect to the sovereignty of host countries in which it operates, ” and further stated that "The authorities are free to investigate what they want to investigate but we should not allow ourselves to be distracted from the need to identify, prevent and protect against terrorist acts of violence."
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Original:  ” US Department of Homeland Security secretary Michael Chertoff has stated regarding the US government that "the government acts in accordance with the law and with respect to the sovereignty of host countries in which it operates, ” and further stated that "The authorities are free to investigate what they want to investigate but we should not allow ourselves to be distracted from the need to identify, prevent and protect against terrorist acts of violence."
Revised:  ” US Department of Homeland Security secretary Michael Chertoff has stated regarding the US government that "the government acts in accordance with the law and with respect to the sovereignty of host countries in which it operates, " and further stated that "The authorities are free to investigate what they want to investigate but we should not allow ourselves to be distracted from the need to identify, prevent and protect against terrorist acts of violence."
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Original:  , ex-Governor of , pushed his ideas on rescuing the country's economy and stated, "[w]e don't need folks who are lifetime Washington people"   
Revised:  , ex-Governor of , pushed his ideas on rescuing the country's economy and stated, "[w]e don't need folks who are lifetime Washington people" . 
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Original:  Amongst the condemnatory responses in the US, Democratic Senator issued a statement saying, "Gingrich offered no solutions — just a can of gasoline and a match." Candidates seeking the Republican nomination for the 2012 Presidential election campaign are jostling for support from the influential block;
Revised:  Amongst the condemnatory responses in the US, issued a statement saying, "Gingrich offered no solutions — just a can of gasoline and a match." Candidates seeking the Republican nomination for the 2012 Presidential election campaign are jostling for support from the influential block;
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Original:  Gingrich's inflammatory remarks were made earlier this week in an interview with cable TV's . "Remember there was no Palestine as a state.
Revised:  Gingrich's inflammatory remarks were made earlier this week in an interview with cable TV's . "Remember there was no as a state.
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Original: Hanan Ashrawi, spokesperson for the (PLO), told Al Arabiya in a radio interview that Gingrich had "lost all touch with reality" and that his comments "reveal ignorance and racism as well as a cheap attempt to woo pro-Israeli voters at the expense of Palestinian rights and peace in the region."
Revised: Hanan Ashrawi, spokesperson for the (PLO), said Gingrich had "lost all touch with reality" and that his comments "reveal ignorance and racism as well as a cheap attempt to woo pro-Israeli voters at the expense of Palestinian rights and peace in the region."
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Original: Hanan Ashrawi, spokesperson for the (PLO), said Gingrich had "lost all touch with reality" and that his comments "reveal ignorance and racism as well as a cheap attempt to woo pro-Israeli voters at the expense of Palestinian rights and peace in the region."
Revised: Hanan Ashrawi, spokesperson for the (PLO), said Gingrich appeared to have "lost all touch with reality" and that his comments "reveal ignorance and racism as well as a cheap attempt to woo pro-Israeli voters at the expense of Palestinian rights and peace in the region."
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Original:  Amongst the condemnatory responses in the US, issued a statement saying, "Gingrich offered no solutions — just a can of gasoline and a match."
Revised:  Amongst condemnatory responses in the US, issued a statement saying, "Gingrich offered no solutions — just a can of gasoline and a match."
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Original:  It was part of the Ottoman Empire," Gingrich asserted although he knew well enough that it was actually originally Canaan or the Canaanite empire . "We've had an invented Palestinian people, who are in fact Arabs, and were historically part of the Arab community [...] They had a chance to go many places.
Revised:  It was part of the Ottoman Empire," Gingrich asserted . "We've had an invented Palestinian people, who are in fact Arabs, and were historically part of the Arab community [...] They had a chance to go many places.
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Original:  Youri allegedly has ties to smugglers in Gonaives who control the trafficking at the seaport . About 8 percent of Colombian cocaine on its way to the U.S. goes through Haiti
Revised:  Youri allegedly has ties to smugglers in Gonaives who control the trafficking at the seaport About 8 percent of Colombian cocaine on its way to the U.S. goes through Haiti
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Original:  Youri allegedly has ties to smugglers in Gonaives who control the trafficking at the seaport . About 8 percent of Colombian cocaine on its way to the U.S. goes through Haiti
Revised:  Youri allegedly has ties to smugglers in Gonaives who control the trafficking at the seaport . 
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Original:  Youri allegedly has ties to smugglers in Gonaives who control the trafficking at the seaport  
Revised:  Youri allegedly has ties to smugglers in Gonaives who control the trafficking at the seaport . 
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Original:  Dryden left the band in 1970 to play with New Riders of The Purple Sage, a country rock band formed by members of The Grateful Dea
Revised:  Dryden left the band in 1970 to play with New Riders of The Purple Sage, a country rock band formed by members of The Grateful Dead
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Original:  Dryden left the band in 1970 to play with New Riders of The Purple Sage, a country rock band formed by members of The Grateful Dead  
Revised:  Dryden left the band in 1970 to play with New Riders of The Purple Sage, a country rock band formed by members of The Grateful Dead . 
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Original: Spencer Dryden, the drummer of the legendary American rock band Jefferson Airplane . passed away on Tuesday .
Revised: Spencer Dryden, the drummer of the legendary American rock band Jefferson Airplane , passed away on Tuesday .
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Original: January 13, 2005 Spencer Dryden, the drummer of the legendary American rock band Jefferson Airplane, passed away on Tuesday, Jan. 11.
Revised:  Spencer Dryden, the drummer of the legendary American rock band Jefferson Airplane, passed away on Tuesday, Jan. 11.
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Original: Spencer Dryden , the drummer of the legendary American rock band Jefferson Airplane , passed away on Tuesday, Jan. 11.
Revised:  , the drummer of the legendary American rock band Jefferson Airplane , passed away on Tuesday, Jan. 11.
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Original: Spencer Dryden , the drummer of the legendary American rock band Jefferson Airplane , passed away on Tuesday, Jan. 11.
Revised: Spencer Dryden , the drummer of the legendary American rock band , passed away on Tuesday, Jan. 11.
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Original:  He replaced original drummer Skip Spence and played with Jefferson Airplane at the legendary Woodstock and Altamont rock festivals.
Revised:  He replaced original drummer and played with Jefferson Airplane at the legendary Woodstock and Altamont rock festivals.
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Original:  He replaced original drummer Skip Spence and played with Jefferson Airplane at the legendary Woodstock and Altamont rock festivals.
Revised:  He replaced original drummer Skip Spence and played with Jefferson Airplane at the legendary and rock festivals.
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Original:  Dryden left the band in 1970 to play with New Riders of The Purple Sage , a country rock band formed by members of the Grateful Dead .
Revised:  Dryden left the band in 1970 to play with , a country rock band formed by members of the Grateful Dead .
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Original:  Dryden left the band in 1970 to play with New Riders of The Purple Sage , a country rock band formed by members of the Grateful Dead .
Revised:  Dryden left the band in 1970 to play with New Riders of The Purple Sage , a country rock band formed by members of the .
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Original: The Northern Constabulary stated that the will have a report made for them in relation to this matter .
Revised: The Northern Constabulary stated that a report will be sent to the .
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Original:  Aitchison's death was the first to prompt a murder inquiry on the island of Lewis for in excess of forty years.
Revised:  Aitchison's death was the first to prompt a murder inquiry on the island of Lewis for more than forty years.
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Original: A considerable body of research show that most decisions are strongly influenced by unconscious emotional reactions;
Revised: A considerable body of research show that many seemingly rational decisions are strongly influenced by unconscious emotional reactions;
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Original: The experement used fMRI scans of 30 men who self-identified as either a committed Republican or Democrat.
Revised: The experiment used fMRI scans of 30 men who self-identified as either a committed Republican or Democrat.
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Original: A considerable body of research show that many seemingly rational decisions are strongly influenced by unconscious emotional reactions;
Revised: A considerable body of research suggests that many seemingly rational decisions are strongly influenced by unconscious emotional reactions;
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Original: A  study led by Dr. Drew Westen, a Professor of Psychology at Emory University, finds that political partisans use an "almost entirely emotional and unconscious" thought process when digesting damaging information about a favored political candidate.
Revised: A recent study led by Dr. Drew Westen, a Professor of Psychology at Emory University, finds that political partisans use an "almost entirely emotional and unconscious" thought process when digesting damaging information about a favored political candidate.
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Original: A  study led by Dr. Drew Westen, a Professor of Psychology at Emory University, finds that political partisans use an "almost entirely emotional and unconscious" thought process when digesting damaging information about a favored political candidate.
Revised: A study led by Dr. Drew Westen, a Professor of Psychology at Emory University, has concluded that political partisans use an "almost entirely emotional and unconscious" thought process when digesting damaging information about a favored political candidate.
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Original:  The subjects were given a series of conflicting quotes by either President Bush or Senator Kerry, and covered such topics as Enron and Social Security.
Revised:  The subjects were given a series of conflicting quotes by either President Bush or Senator Kerry, and covered such topics as the Enron scandal and the current state of Social Security.
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Original:  A considerable body of research suggests that many seemingly rational decisions are strongly influenced by unconscious emotional reactions ;
Revised:  The research suggests that many seemingly rational decisions are strongly influenced by unconscious emotional reactions ;
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Original:  A considerable body of research suggests that many seemingly rational decisions are strongly influenced by unconscious emotional reactions ;
Revised:  A considerable body of research suggests that many seemingly rational decisions can be strongly influenced by unconscious emotional reactions ;
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Original:  Dr. Westen will present his results next Saturday at a meetings of the Society for Personality and Social Psychology in Palm Springs, CA
Revised:  Westen will present his results next Saturday at a meetings of the Society for Personality and Social Psychology in Palm Springs, CA
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Original:  Terms of the merger include Pixar's John Lasseter becoming Disney's new chief creative officer, in charge of animation at the combined Disney-Pixar Animation Studios, as well as principal ceative advisor at Walt Disney Imagineering, the unit of the company responsible for research and development of Disney theme parks worldwide.
Revised:  Terms of the merger include Pixar's John Lasseter becoming Disney's new chief creative officer, in charge of animation at the combined Disney-Pixar Animation Studios, as well as principal creative advisor at Walt Disney Imagineering, the unit of the company responsible for research and development of Disney theme parks worldwide.
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Original:  In 2003, prior to his dismissal from Disney, Eisner infuriated Pixar's creative team by predicting  Nemo would be a failure.
Revised:  In 2003, prior to his dismissal from Disney, Eisner infuriated Pixar's creative team by predicting Finding Nemo would be a failure.
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Original:  Terms of the merger include Pixar's John Lasseter becoming Disney's new chief creative officer in charge of animation at the combined Disney-Pixar Animation Studios, as well as principal creative advisor at Walt Disney Imagineering , the unit of the company responsible for research and development of Disney theme parks worldwide.
Revised:  Terms of the merger include Pixar's becoming Disney's new chief creative officer in charge of animation at the combined Disney-Pixar Animation Studios, as well as principal creative advisor at Walt Disney Imagineering , the unit of the company responsible for research and development of Disney theme parks worldwide.
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Original:  Terms of the merger include Pixar's John Lasseter becoming Disney's new chief creative officer in charge of animation at the combined Disney-Pixar Animation Studios, as well as principal creative advisor at Walt Disney Imagineering , the unit of the company responsible for research and development of Disney theme parks worldwide.
Revised:  Terms of the merger include Pixar's John Lasseter becoming Disney's new chief creative officer in charge of animation at the combined Disney-Pixar Animation Studios, as well as principal creative advisor at , the unit of the company responsible for research and development of Disney theme parks worldwide.
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Original:  Jobs purchased what became Pixar for $10 million in 1986 from George Lucas 's computer animation division at Lucasfilm.
Revised:  Jobs purchased what became Pixar for $10 million in 1986 from 's computer animation division at Lucasfilm.
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Original:  The partnership between the two studios had become shaky in recent years, as former Disney head Michael Eisner clashed with Jobs over the renewal terms of their agreement.
Revised:  The partnership between the two studios had become shaky in recent years, as former Disney head clashed with Jobs over the renewal terms of their agreement.
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Original:  Toy Story , its first feature film  came a decade later, and began a long string of animation hits, including Finding Nemo.
Revised:  , its first feature film came a decade later, and began a long string of animation hits, including Finding Nemo.
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Original:  Toy Story , its first feature film  came a decade later, and began a long string of animation hits, including Finding Nemo.
Revised:  Toy Story , its first feature film , came a decade later, and began a long string of animation hits, including Finding Nemo.
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Original: According to Haliburton employees and internal documents, coalition troops at a U.S. military base in Iraq were exposed to contaminated water and Halliburton  blocked efforts to alert the U.S. military.
Revised: According to Haliburton employees and internal documents, coalition troops at a U.S. military base in Iraq were exposed to contaminated water and Halliburton puportedly blocked efforts to alert the U.S. military.
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Original:  Halliburton said that its own inspection found no contaminated water nor medical evidence to substantiate reports of illnesses at the base and a military medical unit found nothing out of the ordinary in terms of water qualityaccording to Marine Corps Maj.
Revised:  Halliburton stated that their own inspection found no contaminated water nor medical evidence to substantiate reports of illnesses at the base and a military medical unit found nothing out of the ordinary in terms of water qualityaccording to Marine Corps Maj.
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Original:  Halliburton said that its own inspection found no contaminated water nor medical evidence to substantiate reports of illnesses at the base and a military medical unit found nothing out of the ordinary in terms of water qualityaccording to Marine Corps Maj.
Revised:  Halliburton said that its own inspection found no contaminated water , and no medical evidence to substantiate reports of illnesses at the base and a military medical unit found nothing out of the ordinary in terms of water qualityaccording to Marine Corps Maj.
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Original:  Halliburton said that its own inspection found no contaminated water nor medical evidence to substantiate reports of illnesses at the base and a military medical unit found nothing out of the ordinary in terms of water qualityaccording to Marine Corps Maj.
Revised:  Halliburton said that its own inspection found no contaminated water nor medical evidence to substantiate the claims of illness. According to Marine Corps Major Tim Keefe – a military spokesman – a military medical unit found nothing out of the ordinary in terms of water qualityaccording to Marine Corps Maj.
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Original:  "The allegations appear not to have merit , " Keefe said.
Revised:  "The allegations appear not to have merit " Keefe said.
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Original:  "The allegations appear not to have merit , " Keefe said.
Revised:  "The allegations appear not to have merit , " 
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Original:  However, water expertBen Carter of Cedar City, Utah, wrote ;
Revised:  Water expert, Ben Carter, of Cedar City, Utah, wrote ;
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Original:  However, water expertBen Carter of Cedar City, Utah, wrote ;
Revised:  However, water expertBen Carter of Cedar City, Utah, wrote ,
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Original:  The water expert said that after he told company officials that they should notify the military ;
Revised:  Carter said that after he told company officials that they should notify the military ;
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Original:  The water expert said that after he told company officials that they should notify the military ;
Revised:  The water expert said that after he told company officials that they should notify the military ,
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Original:   Halliburton's public relations department knew of the problem according to a July 14, 2005 memo.
Revised:  Halliburton's public relations department was aware of the problem according to a July 14, 2005 memo.
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Original:  "I don't want to turn it into a big issue right now, " Halliburton's Jennifer Dellinger wrote, " but if we end up getting some media calls I want to make sure we have all the facts so we are ready to respond.
Revised:  "I don't want to turn it into a big issue right now, but if we end up getting some media calls I want to make sure we have all the facts so we are ready to respond.
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Original: "We exposed a base camp population (military and civilian) to a water source that was not treated," reads a July 15, 2005 memo by William Granger, Halliburton's KBR official in charge of water quality in Iraq and also Kuwait.
Revised: "We exposed a base camp population (military and civilian) to a water source that was not treated," reads a July 15, 2005 memo by William Granger, KBR's official in charge of water quality in Iraq and also Kuwait.
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Original:  Senate Democrats who are holding a public inquiry into the allegations provided the documents to the associated press .
Revised:  Senate Democrats who are holding a public inquiry into the allegations .
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Original: Water expert , Ben Carter, of Cedar City, Utah, wrote, "It is my opinion that the water source is without question contaminated with numerous micro-organisms, including Coliform bacteria.
Revised: Water expert Ben Carter, of Cedar City, Utah, wrote, "It is my opinion that the water source is without question contaminated with numerous micro-organisms, including Coliform bacteria.
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Original: Two men have made a private court appearance in relation to their charge of the murder of Liam Aitchison on the island of , in the of Scotland.
Revised: Two men have made a private court appearance in relation to their charges of the murder of Liam Aitchison on the island of , in the of Scotland.
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Original:  21-year-old Jonathan Mackinnon , from , Stefan Millar, 20, who lives in the district nearby, were both charged with murder at a brief court hearing in Sheriff Court today .
Revised:  21-year-old Jonathan MacKinnon , from , Stefan Millar, 20, who lives in the district nearby, were both charged with murder at a brief court hearing in Sheriff Court today .
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Original:  Examination of this case is set to continue  
Revised:  Examination of this case is anticipated to continue. 
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