wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  54-year-old Marita Blindeman, who was killed in the attack, worked in the day care centre  which was sponsored by social services  since she was 18.
Revised:  54-year-old Marita Blindeman, who was killed in the attack, worked in the day care centre , which was sponsored by social services since she was 18.
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Original:  54-year-old Marita Blindeman, who was killed in the attack, worked in the day care centre  which was sponsored by social services  since she was 18.
Revised:  54-year-old Marita Blindeman, who was killed in the attack, worked in the day care centre which was sponsored by social services , since she was 18.
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Original:  Since the death of her father, she lived  and took care of  her mother and sister, who has a learning disability.
Revised:  Since the death of her father, she lived with, and took care of her mother and sister, who has a learning disability.
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Original:  The couple, who have four children, was moved deeply by the killings.
Revised:  The couple, who have four children, were moved deeply by the killings.
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Original:  Several media considered the safety of day care centres.
Revised:  Several media outlets have discussed the safety of day care centres.
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Original: Responses to the drama Friday evening, the Belgian 's crown prince and his wife visited the crime scene.
Revised: Responses to the drama Friday evening, the Belgian crown prince and his wife visited the crime scene.
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Original:  Some hundred people have singed a mourning registry in Dendermonde's city hall, and flowers and teddy bears were left at the day care centre.
Revised:  Some hundred people have signed a mourning registry in Dendermonde's city hall, and flowers and teddy bears were left at the day care centre.
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Original:  The perpetrator,  20-year-old Kim D. from nearby Sint-Niklaas,  was arrested in the neighbouring municipality of Lebbeke shortly after the crime.
Revised:  The perpetrator, a 20-year-old Kim D. from nearby Sint-Niklaas, was arrested in the neighbouring municipality of Lebbeke shortly after the crime.
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Original:  Killer wore make-up Kim D. wore a bullet-proof vest under his clothes and a backpack containing a knife, an axe and a fake pistol.
Revised:  The attack Kim D. wore a bullet-proof vest under his clothes and a backpack containing a knife, an axe and a fake pistol.
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Original:  "I have a question," the killer asked the first employee he encountered, after which he immediately stabbed her, and started his rampage.
Revised:  "I have a question," the killer told the first employee he encountered, after which he immediately stabbed her, and started his rampage.
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Original:  One female day care worker attempted to disarm the killer , others locked the doors.
Revised:  One female day care worker attempted to disarm the killer while others locked the doors.
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Original:  There were reports that the killer carried a note with names and addresses of other day care centres or schools nearby, something which the prosecutor couldn't comment on.
Revised:  There were reports that the killer carried a note with names and addresses of other day care centres or schools nearby, something which the prosecutor could not comment on.
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Original:  The Associated Press says three judicial officials anonymously confirmed to them that Kim D. carried addresses of three other nurseries.
Revised:  The Associated Press says three judicial officials anonymously confirmed that Kim D. carried addresses of three other nurseries.
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Original:  Eyewitness Hans Staelens told reporters  he had noticed a suspicious character in the street where the day care centre 'Fable Land' was located.
Revised:  Eyewitness Hans Staelens told reporters that he had noticed a suspicious character in the street where the day care centre 'Fable Land' was located.
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Original:  The killer lived alone and was unemployed, but doesn't have a criminal record.
Revised:  The killer lived alone and was unemployed, but does not have a criminal record.
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Original:  Just two years ago, she started having a relationship with a man, writes her son in a letter to newspapers.
Revised:  Just two years ago, she started having a relationship with a man, according to her son in a letter to newspapers.
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Original:  Responses to the drama Friday evening, the Belgian crown prince and his wife visited the crime scene.
Revised:  Response to the incident Friday evening, the Belgian crown prince and his wife visited the crime scene.
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Original:  A silent demonstration is scheduled for tomorrow afternoon , and a mourning ceremony will be held on Monday evening.
Revised:  A silent demonstration is scheduled for tomorrow afternoon and a mourning ceremony will be held on Monday evening.
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Original:  Minister Veerle Heeren said she would consider additional safety measures if the investigation would suggest it, but also added that  "a day care centre should be a haven, not a prison."
Revised:  Minister Veerle Heeren said she would consider additional safety measures if the investigation suggests it, but also added that "a day care centre should be a haven, not a prison."
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Original:  Minister Veerle Heeren said she would consider additional safety measures if the investigation would suggest it, but also added that  "a day care centre should be a haven, not a prison."
Revised:  Minister Veerle Heeren said she would consider additional safety measures if the investigation would suggest it, but also added that , "a day care centre should be a haven, not a prison."
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Original: The  perpetrator, a 20-year-old man from nearby Sint-Niklaas, only referred to as "Kim D." in reports, was arrested in the neighbouring municipality of Lebbeke shortly after the crime.
Revised: The perpetrator, a 20-year-old man from nearby Sint-Niklaas, was arrested in the neighbouring municipality of Lebbeke shortly after the crime.
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Original:  The attack Kim D. wore a bullet-proof vest under his clothes and a backpack containing a knife, an axe and a fake pistol.
Revised:  The attack The attacker wore a bullet-proof vest under his clothes and a backpack containing a knife, an axe and a fake pistol.
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Original:  The  killer lived alone and was unemployed, but does not have a criminal record.
Revised:  The alleged killer lived alone and was unemployed, but does not have a criminal record.
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Original:  These frequencies are used for analog based emergency position-indicating radio beacons ( EPRIB ).
Revised:  These frequencies are used for analog based emergency position-indicating radio beacons ( EPIRB ).
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Original: The phase out of Analog transponders has been along time coming.
Revised: The phase out of Analog transponders has been a long time coming.
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Original:  With the older analog bands, only about 1 in every 50 alerts was real, where as with the digital system that is reduced to about 1 in every 17 alerts being real.
Revised:  With the older analog bands, only about 1 in every 50 alerts was real, whereas with the digital system that is reduced to about 1 in every 17 alerts being real.
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Original: 1st generation EPIRBs Starting February 1st , Cospas-Sarsat will discontinue monitoring of the 121.5 243 MHz frequencies .
Revised: 1st generation EPIRBs Starting February 1 , Cospas-Sarsat will discontinue monitoring of the 121.5 243 MHz frequencies .
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Original: 1st generation EPIRBs Starting February 1st , Cospas-Sarsat will discontinue monitoring of the 121.5 243 MHz frequencies .
Revised: 1st generation EPIRBs Starting February 1st , Cospas-Sarsat will discontinue monitoring 243 MHz frequencies .
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Original:  The 406 MHz digital band has many advantages over the older Analog systems.
Revised:  The 406 MHz digital band has many advantages over the older analog systems.
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Original:  Since the locators send data to the satellites, rather than just  a continuous signal, much more will be known about the emergency before a SAR group arrives, such as the type of vehicle and owner.
Revised:  Since the locators send data to satellites, rather than just a continuous signal, much more will be known about the emergency before a SAR group arrives, such as the type of vehicle and owner.
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Original:  Since the locators send data to the satellites, rather than just  a continuous signal, much more will be known about the emergency before a SAR group arrives, such as the type of vehicle and owner.
Revised:  Since the locators send data to the satellites, rather than just provide a continuous signal, much more will be known about the emergency before a SAR group arrives, such as the type of vehicle and owner.
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Original:  With the older analog bands, only about 1 in every 50 alerts was real, whereas with the digital system that is reduced to about 1 in every 17 alerts being real.
Revised:  With the older analog bands, only about one in every 50 alerts was real, whereas with the digital system that is reduced to about 1 in every 17 alerts being real.
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Original:  With the older analog bands, only about 1 in every 50 alerts was real, whereas with the digital system that is reduced to about 1 in every 17 alerts being real.
Revised:  With the older analog bands, only about 1 in every 50 alerts was real, whereas with the digital system that is reduced to about one in every 17 alerts being real.
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Original:  With fewer false positives and greatly increased accuracy, SAR groups around the world will be better able and faster to respond to life threatening emergencies within the critical "golden day".
Revised:  With fewer false positives and greatly increased accuracy, SAR groups around the world will be better able and faster to respond to life-threatening emergencies within the critical "golden day".
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Original:  They will also be able to do this with much less wasted resources.
Revised:  They will also be able to do this with fewer wasted resources.
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Original:  The phase out of Analog transponders has been a long time coming.
Revised:  The phase-out of analog transponders has been a long time coming.
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Original:  The first warnings were sent by the US Coast Guard out in 2000, and the Analog devices have not been manufactured in the last several years.
Revised:  The first warnings were sent by the US Coast Guard in 2000, and the Analog devices have not been manufactured in the last several years.
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Original:  The first warnings were sent by the US Coast Guard out in 2000, and the Analog devices have not been manufactured in the last several years.
Revised:  The first warnings were sent by the US Coast Guard out in 2000, and analog devices have not been manufactured in the last several years.
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Original:  The change February 1st is world wide and both the International Civil Aviation Organization and the International Maritime Organization recommended the switch
Revised:  The change February 1 is worldwide, with both the International Civil Aviation Organization and the International Maritime Organization recommended the switch
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Original:  The change February 1st is world wide and both the International Civil Aviation Organization and the International Maritime Organization recommended the switch
Revised:  The change February 1st is world wide and both the International Civil Aviation Organization and the International Maritime Organization recommending the switch
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Original: The paper says it has secretly made recordings of Lord Truscott admitting  making a recent Energy Bill more favourable to a client who markets "smart" electricity meters.
Revised: The paper says it has secretly made recordings of Lord Truscott admitting to making a recent Energy Bill more favourable to a client who markets "smart" electricity meters.
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Original: The paper says it has secretly made recordings of Lord Truscott admitting  making a recent Energy Bill more favourable to a client who markets "smart" electricity meters.
Revised: The paper says it has secretly made recordings of Lord Truscott admitting making a recent energy bill more favourable to a client who markets "smart" electricity meters.
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Original:  The Sunday Times also alleges that Lord Taylor of Blackburn had claimed to have made changes to a bill to help Experian, a credit reference agency.
Revised:  The Sunday Times also alleges that Lord Taylor of Blackburn had claimed to have made changes to the bill to help Experian, a credit reference agency.
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Original: File:CORUS-02.jpg| Corus works at IJmuiden, The Netherlands.
Revised:  Corus works at IJmuiden, The Netherlands.
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Original:  Image: Svdmolen International steel conglomerate Corus  is to axe 3,500 jobs worldwide.
Revised:  International steel conglomerate Corus is to axe 3,500 jobs worldwide.
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Original:  The Bath Spa railway station in Bath , United Kingdom was targeted by vandals over the weekend.
Revised:  The Bath Spa railway station in Bath was targeted by vandals over the weekend.
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Original:  First Great Western who owns Bath Spa station released this statement threw spokesman Dan Panes .
Revised:  First Great Western who owns Bath Spa station released a statement through spokesman Dan Panes .
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Original:  He said " Last year we invested a considerable amount of money improving the station environment at Bath Spa for our customers, and it's a great shame that a couple of minutes of vandalism could cause so much damage. ”
Revised:  He said " last year we invested a considerable amount of money improving the station environment at Bath Spa for our customers, and it's a great shame that a couple of minutes of vandalism could cause so much damage. ”
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Original:  He said " Last year we invested a considerable amount of money improving the station environment at Bath Spa for our customers, and it's a great shame that a couple of minutes of vandalism could cause so much damage. ”
Revised:  He said " Last year we invested a considerable amount of money improving the station environment at Bath Spa for our customers, and it's a great shame that a couple of minutes of vandalism could cause so much damage. "
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Original: Sumo fighter Asashoryu returned to fighting after bring on the injured list for nearly nine months, to win the New Year Grand Sumo Tournament held at Ryogoku Kokugikan stadium in Tokyo, Japan.
Revised: Sumo fighter Asashoryu returned to fighting after being on the injured list for nearly nine months, to win the New Year Grand Sumo Tournament held at Ryogoku Kokugikan stadium in Tokyo, Japan.
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Original:  He put the earlier loss down to a hesitant tachiai - the initial charge at each other.
Revised:  He put the earlier loss down to a hesitant Tachi-ai - the initial charge at each other.
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Original:  Asashoryu had missed almost nine months of competition due to an elbow injury.
Revised:  Asashōryū had missed almost nine months of competition due to an elbow injury.
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Original:  Asashoryu whose real name is Dolgorsuren Dagvadorj and hailing from Ulan Bator, Mongolia, started the tournament fourteen days earlier with an opening-day win over komusubi Kisenosato.
Revised:  Asashōryū whose real name is Dolgorsuren Dagvadorj and hailing from Ulan Bator, Mongolia, started the tournament fourteen days earlier with an opening-day win over komusubi Kisenosato.
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Original:  Speaking about the earlier round loss to Hakuko, Asashoryu said "the loss helped motivate me.
Revised:  Speaking about the earlier round loss to Hakuko, Asashōryū said "the loss helped motivate me.
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Original:  Expectations of a fourth consecutive win were high after beating Asashoryu in the earlier bout.
Revised:  Expectations of a fourth consecutive win were high after beating Asashōryū in the earlier bout.
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Original:  Champion Asashoryu in action during the May 2008 Grand Tournament Prior to the final bout Asashoryu practiced his tachai and modified his belt grip to ensure he didn't fall into the same problems he faced in the earlier bout with Hakuho.
Revised:  Champion Asashōryū in action during the May 2008 Grand Tournament Prior to the final bout Asashoryu practiced his tachai and modified his belt grip to ensure he didn't fall into the same problems he faced in the earlier bout with Hakuho.
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Original:  Champion Asashoryu in action during the May 2008 Grand Tournament Prior to the final bout Asashoryu practiced his tachai and modified his belt grip to ensure he didn't fall into the same problems he faced in the earlier bout with Hakuho.
Revised:  Champion Asashoryu in action during the May 2008 Grand Tournament Prior to the final bout Asashōryū practiced his tachai and modified his belt grip to ensure he didn't fall into the same problems he faced in the earlier bout with Hakuho.
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Original:  The change of strategy worked in the final round, with Asashoryu taking an early advantage with a strong left grip on Hakuho's belt.
Revised:  The change of strategy worked in the final round, with Asashōryū taking an early advantage with a strong left grip on Hakuho's belt.
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Original:  Soon after Asashoryu secured a righ-hand grip on Hakuho's front belt and pushed him over the bales, with seemingly little effort to the cheer of the packed stadium.
Revised:  Soon after Asashōryū secured a right-hand grip on Hakuho's front belt and pushed him over the bales, with seemingly little effort to the cheer of the packed stadium.
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Original:  The return of Asashoryu has been a huge boost to Sumo with the association reveling in sellout crowds.
Revised:  The return of Asashōryū has been a huge boost to Sumo with the association reveling in sellout crowds.
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Original:  Asashoryu 's stablemaster, Takasago was pleased that Asashoryu returned to fighting and also pleased with the win in the tournament, but now questions whether he has the passion to continue.
Revised:  Asashōryū 's stablemaster, Takasago was pleased that Asashoryu returned to fighting and also pleased with the win in the tournament, but now questions whether he has the passion to continue.
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Original:  After the win Asashoryu claimed "I'm Back".
Revised:  After the win Asashōryū exclaimed "I'm Back".
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Original:  Champion Asashōryū in action during the May 2008 Grand Tournament Prior to the final bout Asashōryū practiced his tachai and modified his belt grip to ensure he didn't fall into the same problems he faced in the earlier bout with Hakuho .
Revised:  Champion Asashōryū in action during the May 2008 Grand Tournament Prior to the final bout Asashōryū practiced his tachai and modified his belt grip to ensure he didn't fall into the same problems he faced in the earlier bout with Hakuhō .
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Original:  This neutralized the left hand on Hakuho , which has been dominant throughout the tournament.
Revised:  This neutralized the left hand on Hakuhō , which has been dominant throughout the tournament.
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Original:  Soon after Asashōryū secured a right-hand grip on Hakuho 's front belt and pushed him over the bales, with seemingly little effort to the cheer of the packed stadium.
Revised:  Soon after Asashōryū secured a right-hand grip on Hakuhō 's front belt and pushed him over the bales, with seemingly little effort to the cheer of the packed stadium.
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Original:  Asashōryū's stablemaster, Takasago was pleased that Asashoryu returned to fighting and also pleased with the win in the tournament, but now questions whether he has the passion to continue.
Revised:  Asashōryū's stablemaster, Takasago was pleased that Asashōryū returned to fighting and also pleased with the win in the tournament, but now questions whether he has the passion to continue.
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Original: Sumo fighter Asashōryū Akinori returned to fighting after being on the injured list for nearly nine months, to win the New Year Grand Sumo Tournament held at Ryogoku Kokugikan stadium in Tokyo, Japan.
Revised: Sumo fighter Asashōryū Akinori returned to fighting after being on the injured list for nearly nine months, to win the New Year Grand Sumo Tournament held at Ryōgoku Kokugikan stadium in Tokyo, Japan.
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Original: Speaking about the earlier round loss to Hakuko , Asashōryū said "the loss helped motivate me.
Revised: Speaking about the earlier round loss to Hakuhō , Asashōryū said "the loss helped motivate me.
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Original: They avalacnhe may have caused by rising temperatures in the area.
Revised: The avalacnhe may have caused by rising temperatures in the area.
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Original:  The avalacnche occured at 11:15 local time (9:15 UTC) yesterday on Mount Zigana in the Gumashane region of Turkey near the Black Sea coast.
Revised:  The avalanche occurred at 11:15 local time (9:15 UTC) yesterday on Mount Zigana in the Gumashane region of Turkey near the Black Sea coast.
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Original:  Winter sports are increasing in populariy across Turkey, as it is mountainous.
Revised:  Winter sports are increasing in popularity across Turkey, as it is mountainous.
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Original:  atleast two were taken to hospital, one of which died in hospital.
Revised:  at least two were taken to hospital, one of which died in hospital.
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Original:  The block of snow dragged them 1,000 metres into a valley as the avalanche travelled down the mountain.
Revised:  The block of snow dragged them 1,000 metres into a valley as the avalanche traveled down the mountain.
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Original:  The avalacnhe may have caused by rising temperatures in the area.
Revised:  The avalanche may have caused by rising temperatures in the area.
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Original: 300px|Location of Zigana in Turkey Ten climbers at a ski resort in Zigana, Turkey have died in an avalanche.
Revised:  Ten climbers at a ski resort in Zigana, Turkey have died in an avalanche.
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Original:  A gun-shot was also classed as weak possibility of cause after some witnesses had said they heard one.
Revised:  A gun-shot was also considered as weak possible of cause after some witnesses had said they heard one.
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Original:  A gun-shot was also classed as weak possibility of cause after some witnesses had said they heard one.
Revised:  A gun-shot was also classed as weak possibility of cause after some witnesses said they heard one.
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Original:  This comes after climbers were killed in Scotland after an avalanche, as well another seven deaths across the French alps
Revised:  This comes after climbers were killed in Scotland after an avalanche, as well another seven deaths across the French Alps
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Original:  250px|Location of Zigana in Turkey The climbers were at a height of 7,260ft (2,200m) when crossing a deep valley, as the snow hit them.
Revised:  250px|Location of Zigana in Turkey The climbers were at a height of 7,260ft (2,200m) while crossing a deep valley, as the snow hit them.
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Original:  250px|Location of Zigana in Turkey The climbers were at a height of 7,260ft (2,200m) when crossing a deep valley, as the snow hit them.
Revised:  250px|Location of Zigana in Turkey The climbers were at a height of 7,260ft (2,200m) when crossing a deep valley, when the snow hit them.
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Original:  They were walking in a single-person line, as it hit them.
Revised:  They were walking in a single-file line, as it hit them.
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