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Original: JPG|Sharron Angle in 2010 ]] An influential Nevada politician from the Republican Party has stated she opposes Sharron Angle 's candidacy for United States Senate in that state due to Angle's "extreme" stance against abortion, and will vote against the candidate in the upcoming general election in November.
Revised: JPG|Sharron Angle in 2010 ]] An influential Nevada politician from the Republican Party has stated she opposes Sharron Angle 's candidacy for United States in that state due to Angle's "extreme" stance against abortion, and will vote against the candidate in the upcoming general election in November.
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Original:  Sharron Angle is against abortion in all cases, including incidents of rape and incest .
Revised:  Sharron Angle is against abortion in all cases, including incidents of and .
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Original:  Sue Wagner is a former Lieutenant Governor of Nevada .
Revised:  is a former Lieutenant Governor of Nevada .
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Original:  Sue Wagner is a former Lieutenant Governor of Nevada .
Revised:  Sue Wagner is a former .
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Original:  She has served as a member of the Nevada Gaming Commission , and as a state legislator.
Revised:  She has served as a member of the , and as a state legislator.
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Original:  Wagner characterized Sharron Angle's position against abortion as "extreme", but said she would not endorse the candidacy of Angle's major party opponent, Democratic United States Senate Majority Leader Harry Reid.
Revised:  Wagner characterized Sharron Angle's position against abortion as "extreme", but said she would not endorse the candidacy of Angle's major party opponent, United States Senate Majority Leader Harry Reid.
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Original:  Wagner characterized Sharron Angle's position against abortion as "extreme", but said she would not endorse the candidacy of Angle's major party opponent, Democratic United States Senate Majority Leader Harry Reid.
Revised:  Wagner characterized Sharron Angle's position against abortion as "extreme", but said she would not endorse the candidacy of Angle's major party opponent, Democratic United States Senate Harry Reid.
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Original:  The Washington Post reported that Senator Harry Reid's first negative campaign advertisement about Angle criticized the candidate for, "... supporting a Scientology-backed prisoner rehabilitation program."
Revised:  reported that Senator Harry Reid's first negative campaign advertisement about Angle criticized the candidate for, "... supporting a Scientology-backed prisoner rehabilitation program."
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Original: According to a government official four miners are trapped in an Ecuador gold and silver mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) to the southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
Revised: According to a Government Official, four miners are trapped in an Ecuador gold and silver mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) to the southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
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Original: According to a government official four miners are trapped in an Ecuador gold and silver mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) to the southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
Revised: According to a government official four miners are trapped in an Ecuador mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) to the southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
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Original: According to a government official four miners are trapped in an Ecuador gold and silver mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) to the southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
Revised: According to a government official four miners are trapped in an Ecuador gold and silver mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
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Original:  The miners have been trapped since 3 :00 am local time.
Revised:  The miners have been trapped since 03 :00 am local time.
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Original:  According to the under-secretary of mining development, Jorge Espinosa , the men are trapped 500 feet (150 meters) below the surface.
Revised:  According to the Under-Secretary of Mining Development, Jorge Espinoza , the men are trapped 500 feet (150 meters) below the surface.
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Original:  According to a government official the men are believed to be alive  because they were far enough away from the site of the collapse, however rescuers have not been able to make contact with them.
Revised:  According to a Government Official, the men are believed to be alive because they were far enough away from the site of the collapse, however rescuers have not been able to make contact with them.
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Original:  According to a government official the men are believed to be alive  because they were far enough away from the site of the collapse, however rescuers have not been able to make contact with them.
Revised:  According to a government official the men are believed to be alive " because they were far enough away from the site of the collapse, however rescuers have not been able to make contact with them.
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Original:  }} According to a Government Official, four miners are trapped in an Ecuador mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
Revised:  }}|left According to a Government Official, four miners are trapped in an Ecuador mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
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Original: A map of Ecuador Image Source|Wikimedia Commons |180px According to a Government Official, four miners are trapped in an Ecuador mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
Revised:  Image Source|Wikimedia Commons |180px According to a Government Official, four miners are trapped in an Ecuador mine located 250 miles (405 kilometers) southeast of the country's capital, Quito.
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Original:  The plane was the same plane that flew over 'Ground Zero' of the World Trade Center site and the Pentagon, after Septemberr 11th, taking 3-D photogrpahs of them.
Revised:  The plane was the same plane that flew over 'Ground Zero' of the World Trade Center site and the Pentagon, after September 11th, taking 3-D photogrpahs of them.
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Original: The National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration is hosting over 3,000 high-resolution images on their website of the devistation along the Gulf Coast.
Revised: The National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration is hosting over 3,000 high-resolution images on their website of the devastation along the Gulf Coast.
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Original:  The plane was the same plane that flew over 'Ground Zero' of the World Trade Center site and the Pentagon, after September 11th, taking 3-D photogrpahs of them.
Revised:  The plane was the same plane that flew over 'Ground Zero' of the World Trade Center site and the Pentagon, after September 11th, taking 3-D photographs of them.
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Original:  The images from the planes was taken to support the national security and emergency managment response requirtments .
Revised:  The images from the planes was taken to support the national security and emergency management response requirements .
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Original:  Google Maps also contains some imagery (though limited) at this time when the word new orleans or anything within New Oreleans is typed in.
Revised:  Google Maps also contains some imagery (though limited) at this time when the word new orleans or anything within New Orleans is typed in.
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Original: Google Maps also contains some imagery (though limited) at this time when the word new orleans or anything within New Orleans is typed in.
Revised: Google Maps also contains some imagery (though limited) at this time when the word New Orleans or anything within New Orleans is typed in.
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Original:  The images from the planes was taken to support the national security and emergency management response requirements.
Revised:  The images from the plane was taken to support the national security and emergency management response requirements.
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Original: 250px|   The photos illustrate how severe flooding was in some areas.
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Original: 250px|   Spanish Fort area of New Orleans, on the southern shore of Lake Pontchartrain (pic is rotated so lake appears on the right).
Revised: 250px| 250px| Spanish Fort area of New Orleans, on the southern shore of Lake Pontchartrain (pic is rotated so lake appears on the right).
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Original:  250px|The photos illustrate how severe flooding was in some areas . 250px|Closeup of 17th Street Canal breach in New Orleans .
Revised:  250px|The photos illustrate how severe flooding was in some areas 250px|Closeup of 17th Street Canal breach in New Orleans .
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Original:  250px|The photos illustrate how severe flooding was in some areas . 250px|Closeup of 17th Street Canal breach in New Orleans .
Revised:  250px|The photos illustrate how severe flooding was in some areas . .
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Original: Accoeding to Mr. Li from the w: State Administration of Work Safety the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
Revised: According to Mr. Li from the w: State Administration of Work Safety the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
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Original: Accoeding to Mr. Li from the w: State Administration of Work Safety the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
Revised: Accoeding to Mr. Li from the State Administration of Work Safety the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
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Original: Accoeding to Mr. Li from the w: State Administration of Work Safety the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
Revised: Accoeding to Mr. Li from the w: State Administration of Work Safet the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
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Original: According to Mr. Li from the State Administration of Work Safet the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
Revised: According to Mr. Li from the State Administration of Work Safety the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
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Original: An early morning coal mine explosion in Beijing, China left 20 miners dead and 17 trapped inside.
Revised: An early morning coal mine explosion in Beijing, China left 20 miners dead and seventeen trapped inside.
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Original:  The blast occurred at approximately 06:00 am (22:00 utc ) local time in the Henan province, about 430 miles (690 kilometers) south of the capital Beijing.
Revised:  The blast occurred at approximately 06:00 am (22:00 UTC ) local time in the Henan province, about 430 miles (690 kilometers) south of the capital Beijing.
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Original:  According to Mr. Li from the State Administration of Work Safety  the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the State Administration of Work Safety the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
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Original:  According to Mr. Li from the State Administration of Work Safety  the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
Revised:  According to Mr. Li from the State Administration of Work Safety said that the cause of the blast and the depth of the trapped miners are unknown.
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Original:  Li also confirmed that seventeen people were trapped instead of 30 as previously reported.
Revised:  He also confirmed that seventeen people were trapped instead of 30 as previously reported.
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Original:  Fatalities in Chinese mines had  reduced, but rose suddenly again earlier this year
Revised:  Fatalities in Chinese mines had been reduced, but rose suddenly again earlier this year
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Original:  Fatalities in Chinese mines had been reduced , but rose suddenly again earlier this year
Revised:  The number of fatalities in Chinese mines had been reduced , but rose suddenly again earlier this year
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Original:  Fatalities in Chinese mines had been reduced , but rose suddenly again earlier this year
Revised:  Fatalities in Chinese mines had fallen , but rose suddenly again earlier this year
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Original:  at least twelve other soldiers are caught up in the allegations    
Revised:  at least twelve other soldiers are caught up in the allegations . 
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Original:  Morlock is also going to stand trial for assault, use of a controlled substance (hashish), attempting to block an investigation, conspiracy to murder, consirpacy to assault and "wrongfully photographing and possessing visual images of human casualties".
Revised:  Morlock is also going to stand trial for assault, use of a controlled substance (hashish), attempting to block an investigation, conspiracy to murder, conspiracy to assault and "wrongfully photographing and possessing visual images of human casualties".
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Original: The United States Army has announced that Corporal Jeremy Morlock is to face a court martial on three charges of premeditated murder.
Revised: The United States has announced that Corporal Jeremy Morlock is to face a court martial on three charges of premeditated murder.
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Original: The United States Army has announced that Corporal Jeremy Morlock is to face a court martial on three charges of premeditated murder.
Revised: The United States Army has announced that Corporal Jeremy Morlock is to face a on three charges of premeditated murder.
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Original:  All the soldiers are from the 5th Stryker brigade, which went to Afghanistan last year and has seen combat in Kandahar , where the alleged attacks occurred between January and May this year.
Revised:  All the soldiers are from the 5th Stryker brigade, which went to Afghanistan last year and has seen combat in , where the alleged attacks occurred between January and May this year.
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Original:  Al Jazeera English reports that much media attention has focused on this detail.
Revised:  reports that much media attention has focused on this detail.
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Original: Don Brash  admitted today that he was aware that members of the Exclusive Brethren Church were going to release a contentious brochure attacking his political rivals.
Revised: Don Brash admitted today that he was aware that members of the Exclusive Brethren church were going to release a contentious brochure attacking his political rivals.
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Original: Don Brash  admitted today that he was aware that members of the Exclusive Brethren Church were going to release a contentious brochure attacking his political rivals.
Revised: Don Brash admitted today that he was aware that members of the Exclusive Brethren Church were going to release contentious brochures attacking his political rivals.
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Original:  Mr Brash initially denied any knowledge of this group but has since admitting to meeting them a number of times and he has admitted today that he was aware of the group's intention to publish brochures that were critical of the Labour Party and The Greens.
Revised:  Mr Brash initially denied any knowledge of this group but has since admitting to meeting them a number of times . He has admitted today that he was aware of the group's intention to publish brochures that were critical of the Labour Party and The Greens.
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Original:  The Exclusive Bretheren are a closed order.
Revised:  The Exclusive Brethren are a closed order.
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Original: Don Brash, leader of the opposition National Party in New Zealand, admitted today that he was aware that members of the Exclusive Brethren church were going to release contentious brochures attacking his political rivals.
Revised: Don Brash, leader of the opposition National Party in New Zealand, admitted that he was aware that members of the Exclusive Brethren church were going to release contentious brochures attacking his political rivals.
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Original:  Mr Brash initially denied any knowledge of the brochures, but said he had met members of the church a number of times.
Revised:  Mr Brash said he had met members of the church a number of times.
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Original: Don Brash, leader of the opposition National Party in New Zealand and sometime drag-queen , admitted that he was aware that members of the Exclusive Brethren church were going to release contentious brochures attacking his political rivals.
Revised: Don Brash, leader of the opposition National Party in New Zealand , admitted that he was aware that members of the Exclusive Brethren church were going to release contentious brochures attacking his political rivals.
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Original: Samsung has announced it will market DVD players capable of playing back both Sony's Blu-Ray and Toshiba's HD DVD next-generation optical storage formats  if the two camps refuse to compromise on a single format.
Revised: Samsung announced it will market DVD players capable of playing back both Sony's Blu-Ray and Toshiba's HD DVD next-generation optical storage formats if the two camps refuse to compromise on a single format.
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Original: Samsung has announced it will market DVD players capable of playing back both Sony's Blu-Ray and Toshiba's HD DVD next-generation optical storage formats  if the two camps refuse to compromise on a single format.
Revised: Samsung has announced it will market DVD players capable of playing back both Sony's Blu-Ray and Toshiba's HD DVD next-generation optical storage formats , if the two camps refuse to compromise on a single format.
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Original:  If development is successful, consumers could expect to see such a device on store shelves next year.
Revised:  Assuming development is successful, consumers could expect to see such a device on store shelves next year.
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Original:  Blu-Ray and HD DVD are projected to be the successor formats for current DVD's . Samsung, while leaning towards the Blu-Ray camp, hopes that it can cover both bases by distributing a player compatible with both .
Revised:  Blu-Ray and HD DVD are projected to be the successor formats for current DVDs . Samsung, while leaning towards the Blu-Ray camp, hopes that it can cover both bases by distributing a player compatible with both .
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Original:  Blu-Ray and HD DVD are projected to be the successor formats for current DVD's . Samsung, while leaning towards the Blu-Ray camp, hopes that it can cover both bases by distributing a player compatible with both .
Revised:  Blu-Ray and HD DVD are projected to be the successor formats for current DVD's . Samsung, while leaning towards the Blu-Ray camp, hopes it can cover both bases by distributing a player compatible with both .
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Original:  Blu-Ray and HD DVD are projected to be the successor formats for current DVD's . Samsung, while leaning towards the Blu-Ray camp, hopes that it can cover both bases by distributing a player compatible with both .
Revised:  Blu-Ray and HD DVD are projected to be the successor formats for current DVD's . Samsung, while leaning towards the Blu-Ray camp, hopes that it can cover both bases by distributing a player with dual-compatibility .
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Original:  While this means spending more in development to unify the two technologies and remain cost-effective  , dual compatibility may pay off for the company if the formats challenge each other as VHS and Betamax did twenty years ago.
Revised:  While this means spending more in development to unify the two technologies and develop a cost-effective , dual compatibility may pay off for the company if the formats challenge each other as VHS and Betamax did twenty years ago.
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Original:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
Revised:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVDs, and benefits from similarities with current DVDs, such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
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Original:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
Revised:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and compatibility with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
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Original:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
Revised:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD players . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
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Original:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity than current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
Revised:  HD DVD offers single layer capacity of 15GB, more than triple the size of standard single layer DVD's, and is benifited by the similarities it has with DVD's such as cheap production and largely compatible with current DVD technology . Blu-Ray can hold 23GB on its smallest single layer version, and is reported to have superior durability and interactivity over current DVD-based technology (such as HD-DVD ) . HD-DVD is currently promoted by Toshiba, NEC, Sanyo and Microsoft;
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