wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Meanwhile, she continued to attend fitness seminars and read any health-related books she could get her hands on .
Revised:  Meanwhile, she continued to attend fitness seminars and read health-related books she could get her hands on .
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Original:  Meanwhile, she continued to attend fitness seminars and read any health-related books she could get her hands on .
Revised:  Meanwhile, she continued to attend fitness seminars and read any health-related books .
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Original:  In  summer of 1996, Conde moved to Los Angeles for the love of Personal Fitness Training , and in search for something bigger and more challenging.
Revised:  In the summer of 1996, Conde moved to Los Angeles for the love of Personal Fitness Training , and in search for something bigger and more challenging.
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Original:  In  summer of 1996, Conde moved to Los Angeles for the love of Personal Fitness Training , and in search for something bigger and more challenging.
Revised:  In summer of 1996, Conde moved to Los Angeles for the love of personal fitness training , and in search for something bigger and more challenging.
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Original:  California brought Conde her to train Brazilian jiu-jitsu , training at the Beverly Hills Jiu Jitsu Club with such luminaries as Mark Kerr and Bas Rutten.
Revised:  She trained in Brazilian jiu-jitsu , training at the Beverly Hills Jiu Jitsu Club with such luminaries as Mark Kerr and Bas Rutten.
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Original:  California brought Conde her to train Brazilian jiu-jitsu , training at the Beverly Hills Jiu Jitsu Club with such luminaries as Mark Kerr and Bas Rutten.
Revised:  California brought Conde her to train Brazilian jiu-jitsu at the Beverly Hills Jiu Jitsu Club with such luminaries as Mark Kerr and Bas Rutten.
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Original:  California brought Conde her to train Brazilian jiu-jitsu , training at the Beverly Hills Jiu Jitsu Club with such luminaries as Mark Kerr and Bas Rutten.
Revised:  California brought Conde her to train Brazilian jiu-jitsu , training at the Beverly Hills Jiu Jitsu Club with such fighters including Mark Kerr and Bas Rutten.
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Original:  Conde is now living and working in Frankfurt am Main, Germany as a professional Personal Trainer .
Revised:  Conde is now living and working in Frankfurt am Main, Germany as a professional personal trainer .
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Original:  Most of these proteins are involved in processes in higher eukaryotes, however  unconventional export mechanism was found in lower eukaryotes too.
Revised:  Most of these proteins are involved in processes in higher eukaryotes, however an unconventional export mechanism was found in lower eukaryotes too.
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Original:  They can be packed into  COPII-coated vesicle and directly fuse with plasma membrane or can fuse with endosomal or lysosomal compartment.
Revised:  They can be packed into a COPII-coated vesicle and directly fuse with plasma membrane or can fuse with endosomal or lysosomal compartment.
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Original:  Alternatively  they can be packed into non-COPII-coated vesicle as well and fuse with Golgi (before reaching plasma membrane) or directly delivered to plasma membrane.
Revised:  Alternatively , they can be packed into non-COPII-coated vesicle as well and fuse with Golgi (before reaching plasma membrane) or directly delivered to plasma membrane.
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Original:  Alternatively, they can be packed into non-COPII-coated vesicle as well and fuse with Golgi (before reaching plasma membrane) or directly delivered to  plasma membrane.
Revised:  Alternatively, they can be packed into non-COPII-coated vesicle as well and fuse with Golgi (before reaching plasma membrane) or directly delivered to the plasma membrane.
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Original: Cytoplasmatic/nuclear secretory proteins Soluble proteins can reach the surface of the cell both by non-vesicular and vesicular mechanism . Non-vesicular mechanism use a carrier to get protein into extracellular space (for example phosphatidylinositol-4,5-bisphosphate).
Revised: Cytoplasmatic/nuclear secretory proteins Soluble proteins can reach the surface of the cell both by non-vesicular and vesicular mechanisms . Non-vesicular mechanism use a carrier to get protein into extracellular space (for example phosphatidylinositol-4,5-bisphosphate).
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Original:  Non-vesicular mechanism use a carrier to get protein into extracellular space (for example phosphatidylinositol-4,5-bisphosphate).
Revised:  Non-vesicular mechanisms use a carrier to get protein into extracellular space (for example phosphatidylinositol-4,5-bisphosphate).
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Original:  Non-vesicular mechanism use a carrier to get protein into extracellular space (for example phosphatidylinositol-4,5-bisphosphate).
Revised:  Non-vesicular mechanism use a carrier to get proteins into extracellular space (for example phosphatidylinositol-4,5-bisphosphate).
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Original:  Vesicular mechanism can use lysosome-dependent pathway, microvesicle shedding or biogenesis of multivesicular bodies.
Revised:  Vesicular mechanisms can use the lysosome-dependent pathway, microvesicle shedding or biogenesis of multivesicular bodies.
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Original:  It is often taken to be an epicurean declaration.
Revised:  It is often taken to be an Epicurean declaration.
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Original:  Emily Dickinson used the line in a whimsical valentine written to William Howland in 1852 and subsequently published in the Springfield Daily Republican: Benson Sewall, Richard, The Life of Emily Dickinson, Volumes 1-2, p. 450.
Revised:  Emily Dickinson used the line in a whimsical valentine written to William Howland in 1852 and subsequently published in the Springfield Daily Republican: 
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Original:   Sic transit gloria mundi  How doth the busy bee,  Dum vivimus vivamus, I stay my enemy!
Revised:  " Sic transit gloria mundi How doth the busy bee, Dum vivimus vivamus, I stay my enemy!
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Original:   Sic transit gloria mundi  How doth the busy bee,  Dum vivimus vivamus, I stay my enemy!
Revised:  Sic transit gloria mundi ," " How doth the busy bee, Dum vivimus vivamus, I stay my enemy!
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Original:   Sic transit gloria mundi  How doth the busy bee,  Dum vivimus vivamus, I stay my enemy!
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Original:   Sic transit gloria mundi  How doth the busy bee,  Dum vivimus vivamus, I stay my enemy!
Revised:  Sic transit gloria mundi How doth the busy bee, Dum vivimus vivamus, " I stay mine enemy!
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Original:   It was also the motto inscribed on the sword of "Oscar" Gordon, the protagonist of Robert Heinlein's 1963 book "Glory Road" . And it is the motto of The Knights of Momus, a New Orleans Carnival organization.
Revised:  ... It was also the motto inscribed on the sword of "Oscar" Gordon, the protagonist of Robert Heinlein's 1963 book "Glory Road" . And it is the motto of The Knights of Momus, a New Orleans Carnival organization.
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Original:   It was also the motto inscribed on the sword of "Oscar" Gordon, the protagonist of Robert Heinlein's 1963 book "Glory Road" . And it is the motto of The Knights of Momus, a New Orleans Carnival organization.
Revised:  It was also the motto inscribed on the sword of "Oscar" Gordon, the protagonist of Robert Heinlein's 1963 book Glory Road . And it is the motto of The Knights of Momus, a New Orleans Carnival organization.
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Original:   It was also the motto inscribed on the sword of "Oscar" Gordon, the protagonist of Robert Heinlein's 1963 book "Glory Road" . And it is the motto of The Knights of Momus, a New Orleans Carnival organization.
Revised:  It was also the motto inscribed on the sword of "Oscar" Gordon, the protagonist of Robert Heinlein's 1963 book "Glory Road" . And it is the motto of the Knights of Momus, a New Orleans Carnival organization.
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Original:  Orton, Job, Memoirs of the Life, Character and Writings of the Late Reverend Philip Doddridge, p. 145.
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Original:  Usage It serves as the motto for  Porcellian Club at Harvard.
Revised:  Usage It serves as the motto for the Porcellian Club at Harvard.
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Original:  And it is the motto of the Knights of Momus, a New Orleans Carnival organization. Notes
Revised:  And it is the motto of the Knights of Momus, a New Orleans Carnival organization. 
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Original:  Emily Dickinson used the line in a whimsical valentine written to William Howland in 1852 and subsequently published in the Springfield Daily Republican: The Tottenham Hotspur footballer Dele Alli has the phrase tattooed on the back of his neck.
Revised:  Emily Dickinson used the line in a whimsical valentine written to William Howland in 1852 and subsequently published in the Springfield Daily Republican: 
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Original:  The collective was one of the first to get license to start local radio in Norway, Radio Immigrants which later became Tellus Radio and founded the Anti-Racist Center (Antirasistisk Senter), where Salimi was the Center’s Director until 1996.
Revised:  The collective was one of the first to get license to start local radio in Norway, Radio Immigrants which later became Tellus Radio and founded the Norwegian Centre Against Racism (Antirasistisk Senter), where Salimi was the Center’s Director until 1996.
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Original: Khalid SalimiKhalid Salimi (born on 23 May 1954 in Karachi ) is a human rights activist, art critic and music columnist for weekly Morgenbladet.
Revised: Khalid SalimiKhalid Salimi (born 23 May 1954 in Karachi ) is a human rights activist, art critic and music columnist for weekly Morgenbladet.
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Original:  Through a series of media appearances, in public debates, and lectures Salimi became the best-known Norwegian-Pakistani activist in Norway during 80´s and 90's . Salimi was also in the leadership of Gro Harlem Brundtland's initiated campaign All Different All Equal.
Revised:  Through a series of media appearances, in public debates, and lectures Salimi became the best-known Norwegian-Pakistani activist in Norway during the 1980s and 1990s . Salimi was also in the leadership of Gro Harlem Brundtland's initiated campaign All Different All Equal.
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Original:  Writing and publishing After he moved to Norway in 1976, he wrote for Universitas, Ny Tid and Contrast in 77/79, before he enrolled into Academy of Journalism (1981 - 82) Khalid Salimi has been publishing numerous articles and essays.
Revised:  Writing and publishing After he moved to Norway in 1976, he wrote for Universitas, Ny Tid and Contrast in 77/79, before he enrolled into Academy of Journalism (1981 – 82) Khalid Salimi has been publishing numerous articles and essays.
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Original:  Other achievements Khalid Salimi became  member of Salman Rushdie's support committee in 1985.
Revised:  Other achievements Khalid Salimi became a member of Salman Rushdie's support committee in 1985.
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Original: Khalid SalimiKhalid Salimi ( born 23 May 1954 in Karachi ) is a human rights activist, art critic and music columnist for weekly Morgenbladet.
Revised: Khalid SalimiKhalid Salimi ( born 23 May 1954 ) is a human rights activist, art critic and music columnist for weekly Morgenbladet.
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Original:  born 23 May 1954) is a peace and human rights activist, art critic, and music columnist for weekly Morgenbladet.
Revised:  born 23 May 1954) is a peace and human rights activist, cultural arts critic, and music columnist for weekly Morgenbladet.
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Original:  Salimi is today an adviser on cross-cultural and art-related issues for the Nordic Culture Fund.
Revised:  Salimi is a former adviser on cross-cultural and art-related issues for the Nordic Culture Fund.
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Original:  As a spokesperson for the Norwegian Centre Against Racism, he has insisted that the Center should be independent of any politicat party's  influence.
Revised:  As a spokesperson for the Norwegian Centre Against Racism, he has insisted that the Center should be independent of any political party's influence.
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Original:  He is a regular contributor to various publications as well as a music columnist in weekly Morgenbladet.
Revised:  He was also a regular contributor to various publications as well as a music columnist in weekly Morgenbladet.
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Original: Abdul Bokar Kan (died 1891) was the de-facto ruler of the upper part of the Imamate of Futa Toro in the late nineteenth century.
Revised: Abdul Bokar Kan (died 1891) was the de facto ruler of the upper part of the Imamate of Futa Toro in the late nineteenth century.
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Original:  Abdul Bokar Kan was the de-facto ruler of the upper Futa.
Revised:  Abdul Bokar Kan was the de facto ruler of the upper Futa.
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Original: United Democratic Left politicians Category:Greek MPs 1950–1951 Category:Greek MPs 1951–1952 Category:Hellenic Army generals Category:Greek military personnel of World War I Category:Greek military personnel of the Greco-Turkish War (1919–1922) Category:National Liberation Front (Greece) members Category:People of the Greek Civil War Category:Greek prisoners and detainees Category:Chevaliers of the Légion d'honneur Category:Greek communists Category: Greek republica
Revised: United Democratic Left politicians Category:Greek MPs 1950–1951 Category:Greek MPs 1951–1952 Category:Hellenic Army generals Category:Greek military personnel of World War I Category:Greek military personnel of the Greco-Turkish War (1919–1922) Category:National Liberation Front (Greece) members Category:People of the Greek Civil War Category:Greek prisoners and detainees Category:Chevaliers of the Légion d'honneur Category:Greek communists Category: Republica
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Original: Vercelloni, Luca " The Invention of Taste.
Revised: Vercelloni, Luca The Invention of Taste.
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Original:  A Cultural Account of Desire, Delight and Disgust in Fashion, Food and Art " (London: Bloomsbury, 2016)
Revised:  A Cultural Account of Desire, Delight and Disgust in Fashion, Food and Art (London: Bloomsbury, 2016)
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Original: The categories of the ordinary as aesthetic Another line emerging from analytic aesthetics and the American Society of Aesthetics has been lately discussing the expansion of aesthetics’ category repertoire to include other qualities (cuteness, prettiness, messiness, neatness, cuddleness loveliness, organized, disorganized)Leddy, Thomas.
Revised: The categories of the ordinary as aesthetic Another line emerging from analytic aesthetics and the American Society of Aesthetics has been lately discussing the expansion of aesthetics’ category repertoire to include other qualities (cuteness, prettiness, messiness, neatness, cuddliness, loveliness, organized, disorganized)Leddy, Thomas.
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Original: Jimmy Fallon covered the book on his "Do Not Read List" segment of Late Night with Jimmy Fallon  , and Alex Horne's first appearance (at the 2000 Edinburgh festival) was with a show titled "How To Avoid Huge Ships" .
Revised: Jimmy Fallon covered the book on his "Do Not Read List" segment of Late Night with Jimmy Fallon '' , and Alex Horne's first appearance (at the 2000 Edinburgh festival) was with a show titled "How To Avoid Huge Ships" .
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Original: Jimmy Fallon covered the book on his "Do Not Read List" segment of Late Night with Jimmy Fallon  , and Alex Horne's first appearance (at the 2000 Edinburgh festival) was with a show titled "How To Avoid Huge Ships".
Revised: Jimmy Fallon covered the book on his "Do Not Read List" segment of Late Night with Jimmy Fallon '' , and Alex Horne's first appearance (at the 2000 Edinburgh festival) was with a show titled "How To Avoid Huge Ships".
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Original:  The 2015 videogame The Witcher 3: Wild Hunt'' parodies the book by including an in-game readable book called How To Avoid Colossal Vessels
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Original:  Two political factions had emerged, the Alfaya and Soriya, supporters of the descendants of the first two rulers.
Revised:  Two political factions emerged, the Alfaya and Soriya, supporters of the descendants of the first two rulers.
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Original:  A power sharing arrangement had emerged under which the position of almami, the head of state, was alternately filled by an Alfaya or Soriya candidate.
Revised:  A power sharing arrangement evolved under which the position of almami, the head of state, was alternately filled by an Alfaya or Soriya candidate.
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Original:  They were angry with the support Futa Jallon had been giving to Samori Ture's Wassoulou Empire, which was also resisting French control.
Revised:  They were angry with the support Futa Jallon was giving to Samori Ture's Wassoulou Empire, which was also resisting French control.
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Original:  In 1889 the British had made a treaty with the French that recognized that Futa Jallon was within the French sphere.
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Original:  Internally, Bokar Biro had to cope with struggles between the Alfaya and Soriya political factions, and attempts by the rulers of the Labé, Timbi and Fugumba provinces to obtain more autonomy.
Revised:  Bokar Biro had to cope with struggles between the Alfaya and Soriya political factions, and attempts by the rulers of the Labé, Timbi and Fugumba provinces to obtain more autonomy.
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Original:  He managed to assemble a new army of 1,500 soldiers with which he defeated his enemies of 2 February 1896.
Revised:  He managed to assemble a new army of 1,500 soldiers with which he defeated his enemies on 2 February 1896.
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Original:  The French demanded the right to build roads through Fute Jallon, to instal a representative in Timbo, to vet all appointments of provincial chiefs and a trade monopoly.
Revised:  The French demanded the right to build roads through Futa Jallon, to instal a representative in Timbo, to vet all appointments of provincial chiefs and a trade monopoly.
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Original:  By March 1795 de Beeckman had spent almost three months on the border of Futa Jallon and was giving up hope of arranging a meeting.
Revised:  By March 1895 de Beeckman had spent almost three months on the border of Futa Jallon and was giving up hope of arranging a meeting.
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Original:  On Tuesday, February 8, after the announcement of Suez port workers strike While what was needed reforms besieging Parliament and the Council of Ministers, led by Ahmed Saada more than 4,000 oil workers strike, demanding higher wages and labor guarantees.
Revised:  On Tuesday, February 8, after the announcement of Suez port workers strike While what was needed reforms besieging Parliament and the Council of Ministers, led by Ahmed Seada more than 4,000 oil workers strike, demanding higher wages and labor guarantees.
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Original: Detained Was arrested several times, most recently on 3 October 2011 during its solidarity with the people of Duwaiqa in front of the Council of Ministers, Aggression him By military police and smash his telephone And his camera and then Arrested him But was released quickly under pressure from his colleagues.
Revised:  Was arrested several times, most recently on 3 October 2011 during its solidarity with the people of Duwaiqa in front of the Council of Ministers, Aggression him By military police and smash his telephone And his camera and then Arrested him But was released quickly under pressure from his colleagues.
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Original: There have been major protests during Khamenei's reign, including the 1994 Qazvin Protests, the 1999 Iranian student protests, the 2009 Iranian presidential election protests, the 2011–2012 Iranian protests, the 2017–2018 Iranian protests, the 2018–2019 Iranian general strikes and protests , and the 2019–2020 Iranian protests.
Revised: There have been major protests during Khamenei's reign, including the 1994 Qazvin Protests, the 1999 Iranian student protests, the 2009 Iranian presidential election protests, the 2011–2012 Iranian protests, the 2017–2018 Iranian protests, the 2018–2019 Iranian general strikes and protests and the 2019–2020 Iranian protests.
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Original:  Journalists, bloggers , and other individuals have been put on trial in Iran for the charge of insulting Supreme Leader Khamenei, often in conjunction with blasphemy charges.
Revised:  Journalists, bloggers and other individuals have been put on trial in Iran for the charge of insulting Supreme Leader Khamenei, often in conjunction with blasphemy charges.
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Original:  Their sentences have included lashing and jail time , and some of them have died in custody.
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Original:  Regarding the nuclear program of Iran, Khamenei issued a fatwa in 2003 forbidding the production, stockpiling , and use of all kinds of weapons of mass destruction.
Revised:  Regarding the nuclear program of Iran, Khamenei issued a fatwa in 2003 forbidding the production, stockpiling and use of all kinds of weapons of mass destruction.
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Original:  The Assembly of Experts elected Khamenei as the next Supreme Leader on 4 June 1989, at the age of 50.
Revised:  Khamenei won the 1989 Iranian Supreme Leader election on 4 June 1989, at the age of 50.
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Original:  Khamenei won the 1989 Iranian Supreme Leader election on 4 June 1989, at the age of 50.
Revised:  The Assembly of Experts elected Khamenei as the next Supreme Leader on 4 June 1989, at the age of 50.
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Original:  Khamenei won the 1989 Iranian Supreme Leader election on 4 June 1989, at the age of 50.
Revised:  Khamenei won the 1989 Iranian Supreme Leader election on 4 June 1989, at age 50.
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Original: Bureaucratic inertia is the inevitable tendency of bureaucratic organizations to perpetuate the established procedures and modes, even if they are counterproductive and/or diametrically opposed to established organizational URL This unchecked growth may continue independently of the organization's success or URL Through bureaucratic inertia, organizations tend to take on a life of their own beyond their formal objectives.
Revised: Bureaucratic inertia is the inevitable tendency of bureaucratic organizations to perpetuate the established procedures and modes, even if they are counterproductive and/or diametrically opposed to established organizational goals. This unchecked growth may continue independently of the organization's success or URL Through bureaucratic inertia, organizations tend to take on a life of their own beyond their formal objectives.
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Original: Bureaucratic inertia is the inevitable tendency of bureaucratic organizations to perpetuate the established procedures and modes, even if they are counterproductive and/or diametrically opposed to established organizational URL This unchecked growth may continue independently of the organization's success or URL Through bureaucratic inertia, organizations tend to take on a life of their own beyond their formal objectives.
Revised: Bureaucratic inertia is the inevitable tendency of bureaucratic organizations to perpetuate the established procedures and modes, even if they are counterproductive and/or diametrically opposed to established organizational URL This unchecked growth may continue independently of the organization's success or failure. Through bureaucratic inertia, organizations tend to take on a life of their own beyond their formal objectives.
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