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Original:  The term "computer game" also includes games which display only text (and which can, therefore, theoretically be played on a teletypewriter) or which use other methods, such as sound or vibration, as their primary feedback device , but there are very few new games in these categories .
Revised:  The term "computer game" also includes games which display only text (and which can, therefore, theoretically be played on a teletypewriter) or which use other methods, such as sound or vibration, as their primary feedback device .
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Original: Film is considered by many to be an important art form ;
Revised: Film has emerged as an important art form ;
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Original:  Many other mass media outlets have an additional presence on the web, by such means as linking to or running TV ads online, or distributing QR Codes in outdoor or print media to direct mobile users to a website.
Revised:  Many other mass media outlets have an additional presence on the web, by such means as linking to or running TV ads online, or distributing QR codes in outdoor or print media to direct mobile users to a website.
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Original: Riesman et al. (1950) ch. 2 p. 50 Event organizing and public speaking can also be considered forms of mass media.
Revised: Riesman et al. (1950) ch. 2 p. 50 Event organising and public speaking can also be considered forms of mass media.
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Original:  The organizations that control these technologies, such as movie studios, publishing companies, and radio and television stations, are also known as the mass media.
Revised:  The organisations that control these technologies, such as movie studios, publishing companies, and radio and television stations, are also known as the mass media.
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Original:  In the late 20th century, mass media could be classified into eight mass media industries: books, the Internet, magazines, movies, newspapers, radio, recordings , and television.
Revised:  In the late 20th century, mass media could be classified into eight mass media industries: books, the Internet, magazines, movies, newspapers, radio, recordings and television.
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Original:  For example, it is controversial whether to include cell phones, computer games (such as MMORPGs) , and video games in the definition.
Revised:  For example, it is controversial whether to include mobile phones, computer games (such as MMORPGs) , and video games in the definition.
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Original:  For example, it is controversial whether to include cell phones, computer games (such as MMORPGs) , and video games in the definition.
Revised:  For example, it is controversial whether to include cell phones, computer games (such as MMORPGs) and video games in the definition.
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Original:  In order of introduction, they are: Print (books, pamphlets, newspapers, magazines, posters, etc.) from the late 15th century Recordings (gramophone records, magnetic tapes, cassettes, cartridges, CDs , and DVDs) from the late 19th century Cinema from about 1900 Radio from about 1910 Television from about 1950 Internet from about 1990 Mobile phones from about 2000 Each mass medium has its own content types, creative artists, technicians , and business models.
Revised:  In order of introduction, they are: Print (books, pamphlets, newspapers, magazines, posters, etc.) from the late 15th century Recordings (gramophone records, magnetic tapes, cassettes, cartridges, CDs and DVDs) from the late 19th century Cinema from about 1900 Radio from about 1910 Television from about 1950 Internet from about 1990 Mobile phones from about 2000 Each mass medium has its own content types, creative artists, technicians , and business models.
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Original:  In order of introduction, they are: Print (books, pamphlets, newspapers, magazines, posters, etc.) from the late 15th century Recordings (gramophone records, magnetic tapes, cassettes, cartridges, CDs , and DVDs) from the late 19th century Cinema from about 1900 Radio from about 1910 Television from about 1950 Internet from about 1990 Mobile phones from about 2000 Each mass medium has its own content types, creative artists, technicians , and business models.
Revised:  In order of introduction, they are: Print (books, pamphlets, newspapers, magazines, posters, etc.) from the late 15th century Recordings (gramophone records, magnetic tapes, cassettes, cartridges, CDs , and DVDs) from the late 19th century Cinema from about 1900 Radio from about 1910 Television from about 1950 Internet from about 1990 Mobile phones from about 2000 Each mass medium has its own content types, creative artists, technicians and business models.
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Original:  For example, the Internet includes blogs, podcasts, web sites , and various other technologies built atop the general distribution network.
Revised:  For example, the Internet includes blogs, podcasts, web sites and various other technologies built atop the general distribution network.
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Original:  Broadcast [[File:Crystal radio advertisement.png|A family listening to a crystal radio in the 1920s . ]] The sequencing of content in a broadcast is called a schedule.
Revised:  Broadcast [[File:Crystal radio advertisement.png|A family listening to a crystal radio in the 1920s ]] The sequencing of content in a broadcast is called a schedule.
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Original:  Please see the list of broadcasting terms for a glossary of terms used .
Revised:  See glossary of broadcasting terms for a glossary of terms used .
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Original:  Please see the list of broadcasting terms for a glossary of terms used .
Revised:  Please see the list of broadcasting terms .
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Original:  The name comes from the photographic film (also called filmstock ), historically the primary medium for recording and displaying motion pictures.
Revised:  The name comes from the photographic film (also called film stock ), historically the primary medium for recording and displaying motion pictures.
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Original:  Many other terms for film exist, such as motion pictures (or just pictures and "picture"), the silver screen, photoplays, the cinema, picture shows, flicks , andmost common , movies.
Revised:  Many other terms for film exist, such as motion pictures (or just pictures and "picture"), the silver screen, photoplays, the cinema, picture shows, flicks and, most commonly , movies.
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Original:  They entertain, educate, enlighten , and inspire audiences.
Revised:  They entertain, educate, enlighten and inspire audiences.
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Original:  Video games Shopping carts for children fitted with gaming computers .
Revised:  Video games Shopping carts for children fitted with gaming computers 
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Original:  This involves the use of audio equipment such as microphones, recording devices , and loudspeakers.
Revised:  This involves the use of audio equipment such as microphones, recording devices and loudspeakers.
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Original:  The term record album originated from the fact that 78 RPM Phonograph disc records were kept together in a book resembling a photo album.
Revised:  The term record album originated from the fact that 78 RPM phonograph disc records were kept together in a book resembling a photo album.
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Original:  The first collection of records to be called an "album" was Tchaikovsky's Nutcracker Suite, release in April 1909 as a four-disc set by Odeon records .
Revised:  The first collection of records to be called an "album" was Tchaikovsky's Nutcracker Suite, release in April 1909 as a four-disc set by Odeon Records .
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Original:  It retailed for 16 shillings – about £15 in modern currency.
Revised:  It retailed for 16 shillings — about £15 in modern currency.
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Original:  Music videos can accommodate all styles of filmmaking, including animation, live action films, documentaries, and non-narrative, abstract film.
Revised:  Music videos can accommodate all styles of filmmaking, including animation, live-action films, documentaries, and non-narrative, abstract film.
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Original:  It consists of millions of smaller domestic, academic, business , and governmental networks, which together carry various information and services, such as email, online chat, file transfer, and the interlinked web pages and other documents of the World Wide Web.
Revised:  It consists of millions of smaller domestic, academic, business and governmental networks, which together carry various information and services, such as email, online chat, file transfer, and the interlinked web pages and other documents of the World Wide Web.
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Original:  Contrary to some common usage, the Internet and the World Wide Web are not synonymous: the Internet is the system of interconnected computer networks, linked by copper wires, fiber-optic cables, wireless connections etc.;
Revised:  Contrary to some common usage, the Internet and the World Wide Web are not synonymous: the Internet is the system of interconnected computer networks, linked by copper wires, fibre-optic cables, wireless connections etc.;
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Original:  This rapid growth of instantaneous, decentralized communication is often deemed likely to change mass media and its relationship to society.
Revised:  This rapid growth of instantaneous, decentralised communication is often deemed likely to change mass media and its relationship to society.
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Original:  Most blogs are primarily textual, although some focus on art (artlog), photographs (photoblog), sketchblog, videos (vlog), music (MP3 blog) , audio (podcasting)  are part of a wider network of social media.
Revised:  Most blogs are primarily textual, although some focus on art (artlog), photographs (photoblog), sketchblog, videos (vlog), music (MP3 blog) and audio (podcasting) are part of a wider network of social media.
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Original:  Most blogs are primarily textual, although some focus on art (artlog), photographs (photoblog), sketchblog, videos (vlog), music (MP3 blog) , audio (podcasting)  are part of a wider network of social media.
Revised:  Most blogs are primarily textual, although some focus on art (artlog), photographs (photoblog), sketchblog, videos (vlog), music (MP3 blog) , audio (podcasting) , are part of a wider network of social media.
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Original:  The mobile media content includes over 8 billion dollars worth of mobile music (ringing tones, ringback tones, truetones, MP3 files, karaoke, music videos, music streaming services etc.);
Revised:  The mobile media content includes over 8 billion worth of mobile music (ringing tones, ringback tones, truetones, MP3 files, karaoke, music videos, music streaming services etc.);
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Print media Magazine A magazine is a periodical publication containing a variety of articles, generally financed by advertising or purchase by readers.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Magazine A magazine is a periodical publication containing a variety of articles, generally financed by advertising or purchase by readers.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Print media Magazine A magazine is a periodical publication containing a variety of articles, generally financed by advertising or purchase by readers.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Print media 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Magazines can be classified as: General interest magazines (e.g. Frontline, India Today, The Week, The Sunday Times etc.) Special interest magazines (women's, sports, business, scuba diving, etc.)
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Original:  Newspaper%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:911-Panel.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:911-Panel.
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Original:  Frankfurt: WAN-IFRA . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Outdoor media File:Dutch provinces elections billboard, Oude Pekela (2019) 02.jpg|Political advertisements on a billboard in the Netherlands in 2019.
Revised:  Frankfurt: WAN-IFRA . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% File:Dutch provinces elections billboard, Oude Pekela (2019) 02.jpg|Political advertisements on a billboard in the Netherlands in 2019.
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Original:  Frankfurt: WAN-IFRA . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Outdoor media File:Dutch provinces elections billboard, Oude Pekela (2019) 02.jpg|Political advertisements on a billboard in the Netherlands in 2019.
Revised:  Frankfurt: WAN-IFRA . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Outdoor media 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Professions involving mass media Journalism%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Journalism is the discipline of collecting, analyzing, verifying and presenting information regarding current events, trends, issues and people.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Journalism%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Journalism is the discipline of collecting, analyzing, verifying and presenting information regarding current events, trends, issues and people.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Professions involving mass media Journalism%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Journalism is the discipline of collecting, analyzing, verifying and presenting information regarding current events, trends, issues and people.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Professions involving mass media %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Journalism is the discipline of collecting, analyzing, verifying and presenting information regarding current events, trends, issues and people.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Public relations Public relations is the art and science of managing communication between an organization and its key publics to build, manage and sustain its positive image.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Public relations is the art and science of managing communication between an organization and its key publics to build, manage and sustain its positive image.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% As a business, publishing includes the development, marketing, production, and distribution of newspapers, magazines, books, literary works, musical works, software, other works dealing with information.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Software publishing A software publisher is a publishing company in the software industry between the developer and the distributor.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A software publisher is a publishing company in the software industry between the developer and the distributor.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Influence and sociology%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Limited-effects theory, originally tested in the 1940s and 1950s, considers that because people usually choose what media to interact with based on what they already believe, media exerts a negligible influence.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Limited-effects theory, originally tested in the 1940s and 1950s, considers that because people usually choose what media to interact with based on what they already believe, media exerts a negligible influence.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Influence and sociology%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Limited-effects theory, originally tested in the 1940s and 1950s, considers that because people usually choose what media to interact with based on what they already believe, media exerts a negligible influence.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Influence and sociology%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% while the 1940s and 1950s, considers that because people usually choose what media to interact with based on what they already believe, media exerts a negligible influence.
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Original:  According to Morris Creative Group, these six companies made over 200 billion dollars in revenue in 2010.
Revised:  According to Morris Creative Group, these six companies made over 200 billion in revenue in 2010.
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Original:  In mid-1970s when Betty Ford and Happy Rockefeller, wives of the then-President and then-Vice President  respectively, were both diagnosed with breast cancer.
Revised:  In mid-1970s when Betty Ford and Happy Rockefeller, wives of the then-President and then-Vice President , respectively, were both diagnosed with breast cancer.
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Original:  Finnegan and Viswanath say, "groups, institutions , and advocates compete to identify problems, to move them onto the public agenda, and to define the issues symbolically" (1997, p. 324).
Revised:  Finnegan and Viswanath say, "groups, institutions and advocates compete to identify problems, to move them onto the public agenda, and to define the issues symbolically" (1997, p. 324).
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Original:  The resulting belief is likely to be different depending on where people live  however.
Revised:  The resulting belief is likely to be different depending on where people live , however.
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Original:  Up to the point that it emerged the idea that when a country has reached a high level of industrialization , the country itself "belongs to the person who controls communications."
Revised:  Up to the point that it emerged the idea that when a country has reached a high level of industrialisation , the country itself "belongs to the person who controls communications."
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Original:  They also play a large role in shaping modern culture, by selecting and portraying a particular set of beliefs, values , and traditions (an entire way of life), as reality.
Revised:  They also play a large role in shaping modern culture, by selecting and portraying a particular set of beliefs, values and traditions (an entire way of life), as reality.
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Original:  Mass media also play a crucial role in the spread of civil unrest activities such as anti-government demonstrations, riots , and general strikes.
Revised:  Mass media also play a crucial role in the spread of civil unrest activities such as anti-government demonstrations, riots and general strikes.
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Original:  Detail from cover of The Celebrated Negro Melodies, as Sung by the Virginia Minstrels, 1843.
Revised:  Detail from cover of The Celebrated Negro Melodies, as Sung by the Virginia Minstrels, 1843
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Original:  Published in Harper's Weekly, 1871.
Revised:  Published in Harper's Weekly, 1871
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Original:  Example According to Stephen Balkaran, an Instructor of Political Science and African American Studies at Central Connecticut State University, mass media has played a large role in the way white Americans perceive African-Americans .
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Original:  The media focus on African-American in the contexts of crime, drug use, gang violence , and other forms of anti-social behavior has resulted in a distorted and harmful public perception of African-Americans .
Revised:  The media focus on African American in the contexts of crime, drug use, gang violence , and other forms of anti-social behavior has resulted in a distorted and harmful public perception of African-Americans .
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Original:  The media focus on African-American in the contexts of crime, drug use, gang violence , and other forms of anti-social behavior has resulted in a distorted and harmful public perception of African-Americans .
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Original:  The media focus on African-American in the contexts of crime, drug use, gang violence , and other forms of anti-social behavior has resulted in a distorted and harmful public perception of African-Americans .
Revised:  The media focus on African-American in the contexts of crime, drug use, gang violence , and other forms of anti-social behavior has resulted in a distorted and harmful public perception of African Americans .
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Original:  In his 1999 article "Mass Media and Racism", Balkaran states: "The media has played a key role in perpetuating the effects of this historical oppression and in contributing to African-Americans ' continuing status as second-class citizens".
Revised:  In his 1999 article "Mass Media and Racism", Balkaran states: "The media has played a key role in perpetuating the effects of this historical oppression and in contributing to African Americans ' continuing status as second-class citizens".
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Original:  This has resulted in an uncertainty among white Americans as to what the genuine nature of African-Americans really is.
Revised:  This has resulted in an uncertainty among white Americans as to what the genuine nature of African Americans really is.
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Original:  Since the 1950s, in the countries that have reached a high level of industrialization , the mass media of cinema, radio and TV have a key role in political power.
Revised:  Since the 1950s, in the countries that have reached a high level of industrialisation , the mass media of cinema, radio and TV have a key role in political power.
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Original:  Bennett's critique of 21st Century mass media argues that today it is more common for a group of people to be receiving different news stories, from completely different sources, and thus, mass media has been re-invented.
Revised:  Bennett's critique of 21st-century mass media argues that today it is more common for a group of people to be receiving different news stories, from completely different sources, and thus, mass media has been re-invented.
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Original:  Multicenter AIDS Cohort Study – a study of over 6,000 men infected with HIV that has been ongoing for over 25 years Stateville Penitentiary Malaria Study – a controlled study of the effects of malaria on the  inmates of Stateville Penitentiary near Joliet, Illinois.
Revised:  Multicenter AIDS Cohort Study – a study of over 6,000 men infected with HIV that has been ongoing for over 25 years Stateville Penitentiary Malaria Study – a controlled study of the effects of malaria on the black inmates of Stateville Penitentiary near Joliet, Illinois.
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Original:  Blind experiment 
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Original: study First-in-man study Longitudinal study Minimisation Multicenter trial Nested case-control study Observational study Open-label trial Placebo-controlled studies Prospective cohort study Randomized controlled trial Retrospective cohort study Run-in period Seeding trial Vaccine trial  Adverse drug reaction Adverse event Council for International Organizations of Medical Sciences Data confidentiality in clinical trials Data monitoring committees Ethics Committee (European Union)
Revised: study First-in-man study Longitudinal study Minimisation Multicenter trial Nested case-control study Observational study Open-label trial Placebo-controlled studies Prospective cohort study Randomized controlled trial Retrospective cohort study Run-in period Seeding trial Vaccine trial Human subject research Adverse drug reaction Adverse event Council for International Organizations of Medical Sciences Data confidentiality in clinical trials Data monitoring committees Ethics Committee (European Union)
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