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Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated  he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in order to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated  he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn around, but Tie Xuan refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated  he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated  he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded that his flesh be cooked and then stuffed into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated  he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, asking , " is it not sweet"?
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated  he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " is it not sweet"?
Revised: Unyielding and dying Soon after Tie Xuan's soldiers were defeated he was captured , he refused to surrender , and he sat down with his back turned in court to insult Zhu Di. Zhu Di ordered him to turn his body around, Tie Xuan however all along refused to listen, even after his ears and nose were cut off he refused to look back . Zhu Di commanded to cook his flesh and then to stuff it into his mouth, and also asked , " Is it not sweet"?
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Tie Xuan replied sternly, " the flesh of a faithful official and filial son, why would it not be sweet"?
Revised:  Tie Xuan replied sternly, " The flesh of a faithful official and filial son, why would it not be sweet"?
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Thereupon his limbs were torn off , Tie Xuan died after incessant torture.
Revised:  Thereupon his limbs were torn off . Tie Xuan died after incessant torture.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  After he died they again used oil to cook his corpse , during the course of events wished to face north to worship, but the heat caused oil to unexpectedly splash and drop.
Revised:  After he died they again used oil to cook his corpse . During the course of events wished to face north to worship, but the heat caused oil to unexpectedly splash and drop.
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Original:  His 83-year-old father Tie Zhongming and his mother  Mrs. Xue  were exiled to Hainan.
Revised:  His 83-year-old father , Tie Zhongming, and his mother Mrs. Xue were exiled to Hainan.
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Original:  His 83-year-old father Tie Zhongming and his mother  Mrs. Xue  were exiled to Hainan.
Revised:  His 83-year-old father Tie Zhongming and his mother , Mrs. Xue were exiled to Hainan.
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Original:  His 83-year-old father Tie Zhongming and his mother  Mrs. Xue  were exiled to Hainan.
Revised:  His 83-year-old father Tie Zhongming and his mother Mrs. Xue , were exiled to Hainan.
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Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“燕王即皇帝位，執之至。反背坐廷中嫚罵，令其一回顧，終不可，遂磔於市。年三十七。子福安，戍河池。父仲名，年八十三，母薛，並安置海南。” Mrs. Yang died of illness , the two daughters refused to agree to be disgraced  , after Zhu Di also gave thema pardon , they were married off to scholars.
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“燕王即皇帝位，執之至。反背坐廷中嫚罵，令其一回顧，終不可，遂磔於市。年三十七。子福安，戍河池。父仲名，年八十三，母薛，並安置海南。” Mrs. Yang died of illness ; the two daughters refused to agree to be disgraced , after Zhu Di also gave thema pardon , they were married off to scholars.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 《明史》（卷142）：“燕王即皇帝位，執之至。反背坐廷中嫚罵，令其一回顧，終不可，遂磔於市。年三十七。子福安，戍河池。父仲名，年八十三，母薛，並安置海南。” Mrs. Yang died of illness , the two daughters refused to agree to be disgraced  , after Zhu Di also gave thema pardon , they were married off to scholars.
Revised: 《明史》（卷142）：“燕王即皇帝位，執之至。反背坐廷中嫚罵，令其一回顧，終不可，遂磔於市。年三十七。子福安，戍河池。父仲名，年八十三，母薛，並安置海南。” Mrs. Yang died of illness , the two daughters refused to agree to be disgraced . Later , after Zhu Di also gave thema pardon , they were married off to scholars.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  His second sonTie Fushu fled to Manchuria beyond the wall.
Revised:  Tie Xuan's second son, Tie Fushu, fled to Manchuria beyond the wall.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong (  Wanli Emperor)'s rule  an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Revised: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong ( the Wanli Emperor)'s rule an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong (  Wanli Emperor)'s rule  an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Revised: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong ( Wanli Emperor)'s rule , an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong (  Wanli Emperor)'s rule  an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Revised: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong ( Wanli Emperor)'s rule an imperial edict was issued ordering the offering of " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong (  Wanli Emperor)'s rule  an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Revised: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong ( Wanli Emperor)'s rule an imperial edict was ordered " sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong (  Wanli Emperor)'s rule  an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Revised: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong ( Wanli Emperor)'s rule an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen Emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong (  Wanli Emperor)'s rule  an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Revised: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong ( Wanli Emperor)'s rule an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the officials' native villages. " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong (  Wanli Emperor)'s rule  an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the 7th ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
Revised: 《罪惟录》：「對群臣言，每稱鉉忠。」 At the beginning of Ming Shenzong ( Wanli Emperor)'s rule an imperial edict was ordered " offer sacrifices to the Jianwen emperor 's court at all the official' s native villages, " Tie Xuan was decorated as the seventh ranking loyal official to Jianwen in his temple.
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Original:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor  Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保 was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, and the posthumous name Zhongxiang 忠襄.
Revised:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor , Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保 was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, and the posthumous name Zhongxiang 忠襄.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor  Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保 was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, and the posthumous name Zhongxiang 忠襄.
Revised:  In the time of the Southern Ming's Hongguang Emperor Zhu Yousong, the title Grand Protector 太保 was posthumously conferred upon Tie Xuan, as well as the posthumous name Zhongxiang 忠襄.
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Original:  In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong 鐵公 temples, all offer sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
Revised:  In various locations in Shandong, there are many Tie Gong 鐵公 temples, all offering sacrifices to Tie Xuan.
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Original:  Jinan's Da Ming lakeside has a " Tie Gong temple ”, the Jinan people regard his spirit as their local city god because he was a native of their city.
Revised:  Jinan's Da Ming lakeside has a Tie Gong temple ”, the Jinan people regard his spirit as their local city god because he was a native of their city.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Jinan's Da Ming lakeside has a " Tie Gong temple ”, the Jinan people regard his spirit as their local city god because he was a native of their city.
Revised:  Jinan's Da Ming lakeside has a " Tie Gong temple . The people of Jinan regard his spirit as their local city god because he was a native of their city.
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Original: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” ), courtesy name Dingshi  鼎石  , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui person .
Revised: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402), 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” ), courtesy name Dingshi 鼎石 , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui person .
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Original: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” ), courtesy name Dingshi  鼎石  , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui person .
Revised: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” courtesy name Dingshi 鼎石 , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui person .
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Original: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” ), courtesy name Dingshi  鼎石  , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui person .
Revised: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” ), courtesy name Dingshi ( 鼎石 , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui person .
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Original: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” ), courtesy name Dingshi  鼎石  , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui person .
Revised: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” ), courtesy name Dingshi 鼎石 ) , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui person .
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Original: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” ), courtesy name Dingshi  鼎石  , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui person .
Revised: Tie Xuan (1366– 1402 《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“时年三十七，十月十七日也。” ), courtesy name Dingshi 鼎石 , was born in Dengzhou, Henan during the Yuan dynasty and was a Semu Hui .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He served as a loyal official to the deposed Ming-dynasty emperor Jianwen.
Revised:  He served as a loyal officer to the deposed Ming-dynasty emperor Jianwen.
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Original:  In the Southern Ming period  he was honored with the title of Grand Protector 太保 and given the posthumous name Zhongxiang  忠襄  (loyal assistant).
Revised:  In the Southern Ming period , he was honored with the title of Grand Protector 太保 and given the posthumous name Zhongxiang 忠襄 (loyal assistant).
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In the Southern Ming period  he was honored with the title of Grand Protector 太保 and given the posthumous name Zhongxiang  忠襄  (loyal assistant).
Revised:  In the Southern Ming period he was honored with the title of Grand Protector 太保 and given the posthumous name Zhongxiang ( 忠襄 (loyal assistant).
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In the Southern Ming period  he was honored with the title of Grand Protector 太保 and given the posthumous name Zhongxiang  忠襄  (loyal assistant).
Revised:  In the Southern Ming period he was honored with the title of Grand Protector 太保 and given the posthumous name Zhongxiang 忠襄 ) (loyal assistant).
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Original:  Later, during Qianlong’s reign in the Qing dynasty, he was given the posthumous name Zhongding  忠定  . Life Early life During the reign of the first Ming emperor, Taizu Hongwu, he did well in his studies 太學生 , and after graduating, he was appointed to an official position 給事中 . Later, he was granted the post of military governor, and oversaw cases and resolved them quickly.
Revised:  Later, during Qianlong’s reign in the Qing dynasty, he was given the posthumous name Zhongding ( 忠定 . Life Early life During the reign of the first Ming emperor, Taizu Hongwu, he did well in his studies 太學生 , and after graduating, he was appointed to an official position 給事中 . Later, he was granted the post of military governor, and oversaw cases and resolved them quickly.
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Original:  Later, during Qianlong’s reign in the Qing dynasty, he was given the posthumous name Zhongding  忠定  . Life Early life During the reign of the first Ming emperor, Taizu Hongwu, he did well in his studies 太學生 , and after graduating, he was appointed to an official position 給事中 . Later, he was granted the post of military governor, and oversaw cases and resolved them quickly.
Revised:  Later, during Qianlong’s reign in the Qing dynasty, he was given the posthumous name Zhongding 忠定 ) . Life Early life During the reign of the first Ming emperor, Taizu Hongwu, he did well in his studies 太學生 , and after graduating, he was appointed to an official position 給事中 . Later, he was granted the post of military governor, and oversaw cases and resolved them quickly.
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Original:  Later, during Qianlong’s reign in the Qing dynasty, he was given the posthumous name Zhongding  忠定  . Life Early life During the reign of the first Ming emperor, Taizu Hongwu, he did well in his studies 太學生 , and after graduating, he was appointed to an official position 給事中 . Later, he was granted the post of military governor, and oversaw cases and resolved them quickly.
Revised:  Later, during Qianlong’s reign in the Qing dynasty, he was given the posthumous name Zhongding 忠定 . Life Early life During the reign of the first Ming emperor, Taizu Hongwu, he did well in his studies , and after graduating, he was appointed to an official position 給事中 . Later, he was granted the post of military governor, and oversaw cases and resolved them quickly.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Later, during Qianlong’s reign in the Qing dynasty, he was given the posthumous name Zhongding  忠定  . Life Early life During the reign of the first Ming emperor, Taizu Hongwu, he did well in his studies 太學生 , and after graduating, he was appointed to an official position 給事中 . Later, he was granted the post of military governor, and oversaw cases and resolved them quickly.
Revised:  Later, during Qianlong’s reign in the Qing dynasty, he was given the posthumous name Zhongding 忠定 . Life Early life During the reign of the first Ming emperor, Taizu Hongwu, he did well in his studies 太學生 , and after graduating, he was appointed to an official position . Later, he was granted the post of military governor, and oversaw cases and resolved them quickly.
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Original:  Ming Taizu was happy with his performance and gave him the courtesy name Dingshi  鼎石  .《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“铁鼎石，名铉，邓州丰和乡人。幼处州校，聪敏迈伦。既入国学，学问益大，除礼科给事中，迁五军都督府断事官。高庙每试以盘根错节，知其能，喜而字之曰鼎石。法司有疑狱未决，多属铉以成。” In the early years of the Jianwen reign, he was appointed to a high administrative position in Shandong province 山东承宣布政使司 . When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave them military rations and supplies.
Revised:  Ming Taizu was happy with his performance and gave him the courtesy name Dingshi ( 鼎石 .《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“铁鼎石，名铉，邓州丰和乡人。幼处州校，聪敏迈伦。既入国学，学问益大，除礼科给事中，迁五军都督府断事官。高庙每试以盘根错节，知其能，喜而字之曰鼎石。法司有疑狱未决，多属铉以成。” In the early years of the Jianwen reign, he was appointed to a high administrative position in Shandong province 山东承宣布政使司 . When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave them military rations and supplies.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Ming Taizu was happy with his performance and gave him the courtesy name Dingshi  鼎石  .《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“铁鼎石，名铉，邓州丰和乡人。幼处州校，聪敏迈伦。既入国学，学问益大，除礼科给事中，迁五军都督府断事官。高庙每试以盘根错节，知其能，喜而字之曰鼎石。法司有疑狱未决，多属铉以成。” In the early years of the Jianwen reign, he was appointed to a high administrative position in Shandong province 山东承宣布政使司 . When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave them military rations and supplies.
Revised:  Ming Taizu was happy with his performance and gave him the courtesy name Dingshi 鼎石 ) .《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“铁鼎石，名铉，邓州丰和乡人。幼处州校，聪敏迈伦。既入国学，学问益大，除礼科给事中，迁五军都督府断事官。高庙每试以盘根错节，知其能，喜而字之曰鼎石。法司有疑狱未决，多属铉以成。” In the early years of the Jianwen reign, he was appointed to a high administrative position in Shandong province 山东承宣布政使司 . When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave them military rations and supplies.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Ming Taizu was happy with his performance and gave him the courtesy name Dingshi  鼎石  .《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“铁鼎石，名铉，邓州丰和乡人。幼处州校，聪敏迈伦。既入国学，学问益大，除礼科给事中，迁五军都督府断事官。高庙每试以盘根错节，知其能，喜而字之曰鼎石。法司有疑狱未决，多属铉以成。” In the early years of the Jianwen reign, he was appointed to a high administrative position in Shandong province 山东承宣布政使司 . When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave them military rations and supplies.
Revised:  Ming Taizu was happy with his performance and gave him the courtesy name Dingshi 鼎石 .《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“铁鼎石，名铉，邓州丰和乡人。幼处州校，聪敏迈伦。既入国学，学问益大，除礼科给事中，迁五军都督府断事官。高庙每试以盘根错节，知其能，喜而字之曰鼎石。法司有疑狱未决，多属铉以成。” In the early years of Jianwen's reign, he was appointed to a high administrative position in Shandong province 山东承宣布政使司 . When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave them military rations and supplies.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Ming Taizu was happy with his performance and gave him the courtesy name Dingshi  鼎石  .《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“铁鼎石，名铉，邓州丰和乡人。幼处州校，聪敏迈伦。既入国学，学问益大，除礼科给事中，迁五军都督府断事官。高庙每试以盘根错节，知其能，喜而字之曰鼎石。法司有疑狱未决，多属铉以成。” In the early years of the Jianwen reign, he was appointed to a high administrative position in Shandong province 山东承宣布政使司 . When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave them military rations and supplies.
Revised:  Ming Taizu was happy with his performance and gave him the courtesy name Dingshi 鼎石 .《国朝献徵录》（卷38）：“铁鼎石，名铉，邓州丰和乡人。幼处州校，聪敏迈伦。既入国学，学问益大，除礼科给事中，迁五军都督府断事官。高庙每试以盘根错节，知其能，喜而字之曰鼎石。法司有疑狱未决，多属铉以成。” In the early years of the Jianwen reign, he was appointed to a high administrative position in Shandong province . When Li Jinglong and his army were sent north to fight against Zhu Di, Tie Xuan gave them military rations and supplies.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He went from Linyi straight to Jinan, with Sheng Yong , Song Can's army to fight to the death in defense.
Revised:  He went from Linyi straight to Jinan, with Sheng Yong and Song Can's army to fight to the death in defense.
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