wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  During his time on the Sherbro, he was involved with the Third Anglo–Ashanto War on the Gold Coast.
Revised:  During his time on Sherbro, he was involved with the Third Anglo–Ashanto War on the Gold Coast.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Lady Carter died in 1895 He retired from the Navy on 21 July 1875.
Revised:  Lady Carter died in 1895. He retired from the Navy on 21 July 1875.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Carter (from his official residence in Bathurst) sent an envoy with a message that if the abuses continued, "he might expect a visit of a disciplinary nature from the marine forces of the Queen of England ." The King sent the envoy back mutilated, with a message: "This is the King's answer."
Revised:  Carter (from his official residence in Bathurst) sent an envoy with a message that if the abuses continued, "he might expect a visit of a disciplinary nature from the marine forces of the ." The King sent the envoy back mutilated, with a message: "This is the King's answer."
Edit intent: clarity
Original: His great-great-grandson named Jack Carter attends Boston College.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Publication process Idea The cycle begins with eh author's deciding on what topic they wish to publish about.
Revised: Publication process Idea The cycle begins with the author's deciding on what topic they wish to publish about.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Publication process Idea The cycle begins with the author's deciding on what topic they wish to publish about.
Revised: Publication process Idea The cycle begins with the authors deciding on what topic they wish to publish about.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  These types of media are generally published from a day to a week after the event being reported on occurred. 
Revised:  These types of media are generally published from a day to a week after the event being reported on occurred. .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Journal article Journals are slower to publish information, but are more reputable that magazines and newspapers.
Revised: Journal article Journals are slower to publish information, but are more reputable than magazines and newspapers.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  E-Books are simply books that have been digitally scanned and posted online . Personal website are usually hosted by an individual.
Revised:  E-Books (see E-Book) An electronic book (or e-book) is a book publication made available in digital form, consisting of text, images, or both, readable on the flat-panel display of computers or other electronic devices . Personal website are usually hosted by an individual.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In general parlance, the term can have many sub-meanings and social layers, but generally includes the following : oh and also y’all need to make sure y’all have condoms if you don’t want to have a baby ;)*
Revised:  In general parlance, the term can have many sub-meanings and social layers, but generally includes the following : 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Several sources say that in humans, any frequency of sexual intercourse might range from 0 to 20 times a week.
Revised: Sex frequency Several sources say that in humans, any frequency of sexual intercourse might range from 0 to 20 times a week.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Illness and death On November 15 , 2009, rumours circulated that the former first lady had died in her hospital bed at the University of California (UCLA) Jonsson Comprehensive Cancer Center in Los Angeles over complications arising from terminal ovarian cancer.
Revised: Illness and death On 15 , 2009, rumours circulated that the former first lady had died in her hospital bed at the University of California (UCLA) Jonsson Comprehensive Cancer Center in Los Angeles over complications arising from terminal ovarian cancer.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Frank Luntz and George Lakoff are exemplary cognitive activists, although most activists participate in cognitive activism to some degre 
Revised:  Frank Luntz and George Lakoff are exemplary cognitive activists, although most activists participate in cognitive activism to some degree. 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Frank Luntz and George Lakoff are exemplary cognitive activists, although most activists participate in cognitive activism to some degre 
Revised:  Frank Luntz and George Lakoff are exemplary cognitive activists, although most activists participate in cognitive activism to some degre Referenc
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Dnyandeo Yashwantrao Patil (born 22 October 1935)  was Governor of Bihar  state in eastern India from 29 May 2012 to 26 November 2014.
Revised: Dnyandeo Yashwantrao Patil (born 22 October 1935) was Governor of Bihar , state in eastern India from 29 May 2012 to 26 November 2014.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Dnyandeo Yashwantrao Patil (born 22 October 1935 ) is an Indian politician who was Governor of Bihar, state in eastern India from 29 May 2012 to 26 November 2014.
Revised: Dnyandeo Yashwantrao Patil (born 22 October 1936 ) is an Indian politician who was Governor of Bihar, state in eastern India from 29 May 2012 to 26 November 2014.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Early life He was born at Ambap village in the present-day Kolhapur district, Maharashtra state.
Revised:  Early life He was born at Ambap village in present-day Kolhapur district, Maharashtra state.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Category: 1935 births Category:Living people Category:Indian National Congress politicians from Maharashtra Category:Marathi people Category:People from Kolhapur Category:Governors of Tripura Category:Governors of West Bengal Category:Recipients of the Padma Shri in social work Category:Maharashtra MLAs 1967–1972 Category:Maharashtra MLAs 1972–1978 Category:Shivaji University alumni Category:Indian male social workers Category:Social workers from Maharasht
Revised:  Category: 1936 births Category:Living people Category:Indian National Congress politicians from Maharashtra Category:Marathi people Category:People from Kolhapur Category:Governors of Tripura Category:Governors of West Bengal Category:Recipients of the Padma Shri in social work Category:Maharashtra MLAs 1967–1972 Category:Maharashtra MLAs 1972–1978 Category:Shivaji University alumni Category:Indian male social workers Category:Social workers from Maharasht
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  On 24 Dec 2018  he joined Nationalist Congress Party.
Revised:  On 24 December 2018 he joined Nationalist Congress Party.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  On 24 Dec 2018  he joined Nationalist Congress Party.
Revised:  On 24 Dec 2018 , he joined Nationalist Congress Party.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Language learning boosts brain plasticity and the brains ability to code new information.
Revised:  Language learning boosts brain plasticity and the brain's ability to code new information.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:   Additionally, hearing signers (individuals who can hear and also speak sign language) do not show the strong left-lateralizated activation for facial expression recognition that has been found within deaf signers  .
Revised:  Additionally, hearing signers (individuals who can hear and also speak sign language) do not show the strong left-lateralized activation for facial expression recognition that has been found within deaf signers .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  A potential reason for this is most facial processing studies done on humans show a stronger stimulation in the right hemisphere than when compared to the left. . This indicates that both sign language experience and deafness can affect the neural organization for recognizing facial expressions
Revised:  A potential reason for this is most facial processing studies done on humans show a stronger stimulation in the right hemisphere than when compared to the left. This indicates that both sign language experience and deafness can affect the neural organization for recognizing facial expressions
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  External links The archive also contains The MacEdward Leach Collection of Songs of Atlantic Canada.
Revised: References External links The archive also contains The MacEdward Leach Collection of Songs of Atlantic Canada.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: A retained surgical instrument is any item inadvertently left behind in a patient’s body in the course of surgery.
Revised: pooA retained surgical instrument is any item inadvertently left behind in a patient’s body in the course of surgery.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Consequences Dangers of a tool or sponge left behind range anywhere from harmless to life threatening . Surgical tools left in the body can puncture vital organs and blood vessels, causing internal bleeding.
Revised: Consequences Dangers of a tool or sponge left behind range anywhere from harmless to life-threatening . Surgical tools left in the body can puncture vital organs and blood vessels, causing internal bleeding.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The FDA state : "The adverse events reported include local tissue reaction, infection, perforation and obstruction of blood vessels, and death.
Revised:  The FDA states : "The adverse events reported include local tissue reaction, infection, perforation and obstruction of blood vessels, and death.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The University of California at San Francisco (UCSF) and North Shore Medical Center (Salem, Mass.) have installed a “bar coded sponge management system”  reasoning that technological error is smaller than human error.
Revised:  The University of California at San Francisco and North Shore Medical Center (Salem, Mass.) have installed a “bar coded sponge management system” reasoning that technological error is smaller than human error.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The University of California at San Francisco (UCSF) and North Shore Medical Center (Salem, Mass.) have installed a “bar coded sponge management system”  reasoning that technological error is smaller than human error.
Revised:  The University of California at San Francisco (UCSF) and North Shore Medical Center have installed a “bar coded sponge management system” reasoning that technological error is smaller than human error.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The University of California at San Francisco (UCSF) and North Shore Medical Center (Salem, Mass.) have installed a “bar coded sponge management system”  reasoning that technological error is smaller than human error.
Revised:  The University of California at San Francisco (UCSF) and North Shore Medical Center (Salem, Mass.) have installed a “bar coded sponge management system” , reasoning that technological error is smaller than human error.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Notes References Berguer, Ramon and Paul J. Heller "Preventing Sharps Injuries in the Operating Room." Journal of the American College of Surgeons 199.3 (2004): n. pag.
Revised:  References Berguer, Ramon and Paul J. Heller "Preventing Sharps Injuries in the Operating Room." Journal of the American College of Surgeons 199.3 (2004): n. pag.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  (see case study below) A radical surgery can be avoided by considering the possibility of a retained sponge or tool.
Revised:  A radical surgery can be avoided by considering the possibility of a retained sponge or tool.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  There are few books about it and it is thought to be under reported .Gibbs, Verna C. “Chapter 22.
Revised:  There are few books about it and it is thought to be underreported .Gibbs, Verna C. “Chapter 22.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Muhajir people Category:Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani Muslims Category:Pakistani physicists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category:String theorists Category:Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706  Category:Theoretical physicis
Revised: Muhajir people Category:Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani Muslims Category:Pakistani physicists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category:String theorists Category:Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706 people Category:Theoretical physicis
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Italian people of Muhajir descent Category: Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category:String theorists Category:Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706 people Category:Theoretical physicis
Revised:  Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category:String theorists Category:Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706 people Category:Theoretical physicis
Edit intent: coherence
Original: 2009 deaths Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category: String theorists Category: Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706 people Category:Theoretical physicis
Revised: 2009 deaths Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani string theorists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category: String theorists Category: Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706 people Category:Theoretical physicis
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 2009 deaths Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category: String theorists Category: Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706 people Category:Theoretical physicis
Revised: 2009 deaths Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category: Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706 people Category:Theoretical physicis
Edit intent: coherence
Original: 2009 deaths Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category: String theorists Category: Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706 people Category:Theoretical physicis
Revised: 2009 deaths Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani academics Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Marxists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:Pakistani science writers Category:Academics of Imperial College London Category:Alumni of the University of London Category:People associated with CERN Category:Forman Christian College alumni Category: String theorists Category: Quaid-i-Azam University faculty Category:Project-706 peop
Edit intent: fluency
Original: In 1961, a Danish archaeological expedition carried out on the peninsula uncovered approximately 30,000 stone implements from 122 paleolithic sites.
Revised: In 1961, a Danish archaeological expeditu carried out on the peninsula uncovered approximately 30,000 stone implements from 122 paleolithic sites.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: The history of Qatar  from its first duration of human occupation to its formation as a modern state.
Revised: The history of Qatar spans from its first duration of human occupation to its formation as a modern state.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A 1934 treaty granted (here is my number msg me now 66024420) extensive protection.
Revised:  A 1934 treaty granted more extensive protection.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:   An old oil installation in north-west Qatar.
Revised:  yes An old oil installation in north-west Qatar.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He had an influence on Srimad Rajcandra’s book Atmasiddhi wherein, he has provided six fundamental truths on soul and liberation following Yashovijaya's Adhyatmasara.
Revised:  He has influenced Srimad Rajcandra’s book Atmasiddhi wherein, he has provided six fundamental truths on soul and liberation following Yashovijaya's Adhyatmasara.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The agenda of this meeting was to create a more formal insurgent organization with the main goal of seizing power from capitalists and directing Colombian society according to the lines developed from anthropology-based Marxist theories .
Revised:  The agenda of this meeting was to create a more formal insurgent organization with the main goal of seizing power from capitalists and directing Colombian society according to Marxist doctrine .
Edit intent: clarity
Original: In a secret supplement to his report to the Joint Chiefs of Staff, Yarborough encouraged the creation and deployment of a paramilitary force to commit sabotage and terrorist acts against communists: "A concerted country team effort should be made now to select civilian and military personnel for clandestine training in resistance operations in case they are needed later.
Revised:  "A concerted country team effort should be made now to select civilian and military personnel for clandestine training in resistance operations in case they are needed later.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  At the behest of the United States, the Colombian government began attacking many of the  self-defense communities  in the early 1960s, attempting to re-assimilate the territories under the control of the national government.
Revised:  At the behest of the United States, the Colombian government began attacking many of the self-defense communities " in the early 1960s, attempting to re-assimilate the territories under the control of the national government.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  TRIAL (MIRA-1) RESULTS" 2006 URL "Results of Rheopheresis for Macular Degeneration not Impressive" 2006 but two German studies (72 and 43 patients) reported good results in URL Daily Mail(UK) 24 Nov 2009 p44 References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Phase IV trial for AMD 1998-2003
Revised:  TRIAL (MIRA-1) RESULTS" 2006 URL "Results of Rheopheresis for Macular Degeneration not Impressive" 2006 but two German studies (72 and 43 patients) reported good results in URL Daily Mail(UK) 24 Nov 2009 p44 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Phase IV trial for AMD 1998-2003
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  he acquired the remaining half four years later. 
Revised:  he acquired the remaining half four years later. .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Quamina Gladstone (1778 – 16 September 1823), most often referred to simply as Quamina, was a Guianeseslave , a Coromantee, who was father of Jack Gladstone.
Revised: Quamina Gladstone (1778 – 16 September 1823), most often referred to simply as Quamina, was an enslaved Guianese , a Coromantee, who was father of Jack Gladstone.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "The 1823 Demerara slave rebellion (Part 2)" Stabroek News According to da Costa, Quamina was African-born ( Orginated from the Fante tribe from the Gold Coast).
Revised:  "The 1823 Demerara slave rebellion (Part 2)" Stabroek News According to da Costa, Quamina was African-born ( originated from the Fante tribe from the Gold Coast).
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Quamina Gladstone (1778 – 16 September 1823), most often referred to simply as Quamina, was an Guianese slave from Africa and father of Jack Gladstone.
Revised: Quamina Gladstone (1778 – 16 September 1823), most often referred to simply as Quamina, was a Guyanese slave from Africa and father of Jack Gladstone.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Parkinson's disease Clinical Research (also known as clinical trials, medical research, research studies, or clinical studies) is any study intended to help answer questions about etiology, diagnostic approaches or new treatments by studying their effects on human subjects.
Revised: Parkinson's disease clinical research (also known as clinical trials, medical research, research studies, or clinical studies) is any study intended to help answer questions about etiology, diagnostic approaches or new treatments by studying their effects on human subjects.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Neuroprotection is the term that describes treatment that may slow down, stop, or reverse the progression of Parkinson’s.
Revised: Neuroprotection is treatment that may slow down, stop, or reverse the progression of Parkinson’s.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: a) Establishing and maintaining a pharmacovigilance system b)
Revised:  Establishing and maintaining a pharmacovigilance system b)
Edit intent: coherence
Original: a) Establishing and maintaining a pharmacovigilance system b)
Revised: a) Establishing and maintaining a pharmacovigilance system 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Preparing pharmacovigilance reports as defined by regulations c) Answering requests from Health Authorities d) Providing Health Authorities with any other information relevant to product safety • Establishing and maintaining/managing the pharmaceutical company's pharmacovigilance system • Having an overview of the safety profiles and any emerging safety concerns for the company's drugs • Acting as a single contact point for the Health Authorities on a 24-hour basi
Revised:  Preparing pharmacovigilance reports as defined by regulations Answering requests from Health Authorities d) Providing Health Authorities with any other information relevant to product safety • Establishing and maintaining/managing the pharmaceutical company's pharmacovigilance system • Having an overview of the safety profiles and any emerging safety concerns for the company's drugs • Acting as a single contact point for the Health Authorities on a 24-hour basi
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Preparing pharmacovigilance reports as defined by regulations c) Answering requests from Health Authorities d) Providing Health Authorities with any other information relevant to product safety • Establishing and maintaining/managing the pharmaceutical company's pharmacovigilance system • Having an overview of the safety profiles and any emerging safety concerns for the company's drugs • Acting as a single contact point for the Health Authorities on a 24-hour basi
Revised:  Preparing pharmacovigilance reports as defined by regulations c) Answering requests from Health Authorities Providing Health Authorities with any other information relevant to product safety • Establishing and maintaining/managing the pharmaceutical company's pharmacovigilance system • Having an overview of the safety profiles and any emerging safety concerns for the company's drugs • Acting as a single contact point for the Health Authorities on a 24-hour basi
Edit intent: coherence