wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Organized by a dozen titled members of London's upper-class establishment and led by Sir Joseph Banks, the African Association felt that it was the great failing of the Age of Enlightenment that, in a time when men could sail around the world, the geography of the Dark Continent remained almost entirely uncharted  .
Revised: Organized by a dozen titled members of London's upper-class establishment and led by Sir Joseph Banks, the African Association felt that it was the great failing of the Age of Enlightenment that, in a time when men could sail around the world, the geography of the Dark Continent remained almost entirely uncharted (leading to the now-offensive nickname, the "Dark Continent") .
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Original:  His account of his travels provoked enthusiasm for further exploration into Africa by Europeans, and the men of the African Association were especially inspired in their own goals.
Revised:  His account of his travels provoked enthusiasm for further exploration into Africa by Europeans, and the men of the African Association were especially inspired to take action toward their own goals.
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Original:  Almost all the European theories of the river's course  hypothesized that it flowed east to west , which contradicted reality .
Revised:  Almost all the European theories of the river's course hypothesized that it flowed east to west .
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Original: Imagery Imagery is a part of daily encounters.
Revised:  Imagery is a part of daily encounters.
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Original:  Guiding the Eye by Grabbing Attention%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Example 1In order to make use of selective attention which is the brains tendency to focus on the most compelling information out of a multitude of visual information, designers have studied how the eye moves around a design.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Example 1In order to make use of selective attention which is the brains tendency to focus on the most compelling information out of a multitude of visual information, designers have studied how the eye moves around a design.
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Original:  168x168px|Example 2 Visual Weight%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Visual weight is a measure of the force that an element exerts to attract the eye.
Revised:  168x168px|Example 2 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Visual weight is a measure of the force that an element exerts to attract the eye.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Eye Guiding Techniques Position - Where an element is placed to influence perception.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Position - Where an element is placed to influence perception.
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Original:  Visual Cues - Using elements to direct attention to more important information and reduce the viewers process time See Also Advertising Advertising management Attention economy Color Psychology Category:Attention Category: Advertising Category:Marketi
Revised:  Visual Cues - Using elements to direct attention to more important information and reduce the viewers process time See Also Advertising Advertising management Attention economy Category:Attention Category: Advertising Category:Marketi
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Original:  Visual Cues - Using elements to direct attention to more important information and reduce the viewers process time See Also Advertising Advertising management Attention economy Color Psychology Category:Attention Category: Advertising Category:Marketi
Revised:  Visual Cues - Using elements to direct attention to more important information and reduce the viewers process time See Also Advertising Advertising management Attention economy Color Psychology Category:Attention Category: Category:Marketi
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Original:  Visual Cues - Using elements to direct attention to more important information and reduce the viewers process time See Also Advertising Advertising management Attention economy Color Psychology Category:Attention Category: Advertising Category:Marketi
Revised:  Visual Cues - Using elements to direct attention to more important information and reduce the viewers process time See Also Advertising Advertising management Attention economy Color Psychology Category:Attention Category: Advertising Advertisi
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Original:  Color    
Revised:  Attention Grabbers Advertisers like to make people feel things in order to gain their attention. Listed below are some of the methods they use: 
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Original:  Color    
Revised:  Color Color- Different colors are said to bring out different emotions in people. Companies carefully choose the colors they use in their logos and advertisement based on the feeling they want to portray. 
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Original:  Color    
Revised:  Color Language- Companies use language to get attention. Words that induce humor, fear, excitement are memorable. 
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Original:  Color    
Revised:  Color Size- Larger images will attract attention more than smaller images. 
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Original:  Color    
Revised:  Color Measurements Eye tracking techniques can be measured by observing the eye movement and pupil dilation when looking at an advertisement.
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Original:  Listed below are some of the methods they use: Color- Different colors are said to bring out different emotions in people.
Revised:  This can be done in a number of ways; Color- Different colors are said to bring out different emotions in people.
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Original:   Language- Companies use language to get attention.
Revised:  Games and activities- A commercial that is in the form of a game for you to experience in a more fun way. This helps you understand it better. Humor- Using ads to make you laugh and so that it will be a funny memory that you remember. Hype- Words like amazing and incredible making products seem “hyped” Language- Companies use language to get attention.
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Original:  Call to action- “Buy today” a way to remove doubt about the next step Claim- Letting you know how to products helps you and works Color- Different colors are said to bring out different emotions in people.
Revised:  Call to action- "Buy today" a way to remove doubt about the next step Claim- Letting you know how to products helps you and works Color- Different colors are said to bring out different emotions in people.
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Original:  Hype- Words like amazing and incredible making products seem “hyped” Language- Companies use language to get attention.
Revised:  Hype- Words like amazing and incredible making products seem "hyped" Language- Companies use language to get attention.
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Original:  He won a second term in 2004 and a third term in 2007 as Anakpawis representative. greenleft.org.au, Crispin Beltran — 1933-2008
Revised:  He won a second term in 2004 and a third term in 2007 as Anakpawis representative. 
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Original:  Beltan drove Osang in his taxicab to his San Juan boarding house, and after 3 days thereat, her furious father beat up Beltran in front of her, and brought him to the San Juan municipal jail.
Revised:  Beltran drove Osang in his taxicab to his San Juan boarding house, and after 3 days thereat, her furious father beat up Beltran in front of her, and brought him to the San Juan municipal jail.
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Original:    References Category:Dental equipment  Category:Sali
Revised:  Safer sex Flavoured dams packaged for sale as a safer sex product. For safer sex and to protect against sexually transmitted infections (STIs), dental dams are sometimes suggested for use as a physical barrier against the exchange of body fluids during cunnilingus and anilingus, especially for women who have sex with women. However, they are rarely used for this purpose, and there is no good evidence that their use reduces the risk of STI transmission, including the risk of infection with human immunodeficiency virus. References Category:Dental equipment Category:Sali
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Original:  The standard is defined by reasonable standard supported with current evidence.
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Original: Not only can it be instruments or debris, chemical materials used in dental procedures such as acid etch, seals,  amalgam can have harmful effects.
Revised: Not only can it be instruments or debris, chemical materials used in dental procedures such as acid etch, seals, and amalgam can have harmful effects.
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Original: A rubber dam can also protect patients  airways.
Revised: A rubber dam can also protect patients ' airways.
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Original:  Disregarding the fact it is low quality evidence, there is still proof that over a two-year period, comparing restorations done using rubber dams versus cotton roll isolation, the rubber dam group had a lower risk of failure with a risk ratio of 0.80 compared to cotton roll isolation at 1.19  .
Revised:  Disregarding the fact it is low quality evidence, there is still proof that over a two-year period, comparing restorations done using rubber dams versus cotton roll isolation, the rubber dam group had a lower risk of failure with a risk ratio of 0.80 compared to cotton roll isolation at 1.19 , however, further research is needed on varying restorative treatments .
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Original:  For safer sex and to protect against sexually transmitted infections (STIs), dental dams are sometimes suggested for use as a physical barrier against the exchange of body fluids during cunnilingus and anilingus, especially for women who have sex with women  .
Revised:  Dental dams are sometimes suggested for use as a physical barrier against the exchange of body fluids during cunnilingus and anilingus, especially for women who have sex with women .
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Original:  For safer sex and to protect against sexually transmitted infections (STIs), dental dams are sometimes suggested for use as a physical barrier against the exchange of body fluids during cunnilingus and anilingus, especially for women who have sex with women  .
Revised:  For safer sex and to protect against sexually transmitted infections (STIs), dental dams are sometimes suggested for use as a physical barrier against the exchange of body fluids during cunnilingus and anilingus, especially for women who have sex with women to protect against sexually transmitted infections (STIs) .
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Original: Use During Oral Sex Flavoured dams packaged for sale as a safer sex product.
Revised:  Oral Sex Flavoured dams packaged for sale as a safer sex product.
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Original:  To be approved for sale a product must demonstrate that it is generally safe (or has a favourable risk/benefit profile relative to the condition it is intended to treat  , that it does what the manufacturer claims and that it is produced to high standards.
Revised:  To be approved for sale a product must demonstrate that it is generally safe (or has a favourable risk/benefit profile relative to the condition it is intended to treat ) , that it does what the manufacturer claims and that it is produced to high standards.
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Original: Funding of Research in the Life Sciences In many countries, an agency of the national government (in the U.S. the NIH, and in the U.K. the MRC  ) funds university researchers to study the causes of disease, which in some cases leads to the development of discoveries which can be transferred to pharmaceutical companies and biotechnology companies as a basis for drug development.
Revised: Funding of Research in the Life Sciences In many countries, an agency of the national government (in the U.S. the NIH, in the U.K. the MRC ) funds university researchers to study the causes of disease, which in some cases leads to the development of discoveries which can be transferred to pharmaceutical companies and biotechnology companies as a basis for drug development.
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Original:  Typically a national agency such as the US Food and Drug Administration (specifically, the Center for Drug Evaluation and Research, or CDER), the UK Medicines and Healthcare Products Regulatory Agency or Health Canada or Ukrainian Drug Registration Agency is responsible for reviewing a product and approving it for sale.
Revised:  Typically a national agency such as the US Food and Drug Administration (specifically, the Center for Drug Evaluation and Research, or CDER), the UK Medicines and Healthcare products Regulatory Agency or Health Canada or Ukrainian Drug Registration Agency is responsible for reviewing a product and approving it for sale.
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Original: A native of Cheruthazham in Kannur taluk of Kannur district in North Malabar, Kerala , he was initiated into Kathakali in his early teenage years under the tutelage of Guru Chandu Panikker.
Revised: A native of Cheruthazham in Kannur taluk of Kannur district in North Malabar, Kerala he was initiated into Kathakali in his early teenage years under the tutelage of Guru Chandu Panikker.
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Original:  The Malayalam actor, Kalashala Babu was his son.
Revised:  The Malayalam actor, Kalasala Babu was his son.
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Original: Krishnan Nair 's powerful style won him admirers.
Revised: Krishnan Nair 
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Original:  Krishnan Nair , towards the second half of his life, had made Tripunithura near Kochi his home.
Revised:  , towards the second half of his life, had made Tripunithura near Kochi his home.
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Original: Krishnan Nair had his higher studies on Rasa-abhinaya (facial emotions which stressed on eye exercises) from the celebrated Kudiyattam maestro Natyacharya Māni Mādhava Chākyār, who too won the Padma URL Krishnan Nair was deeply influenced by Shri.
Revised: Krishnan Nair had his higher studies on Rasa-abhinaya (facial emotions which stressed on eye exercises) from the celebrated Kudiyattam maestro Natyacharya Māni Mādhava Chākyār, who too won the Padma Shri. Krishnan Nair was deeply influenced by Shri.
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Original: Justice Daniel Francis Kweipe Annan (November 7, 1928 – July 16, 2006) was a Speaker of the Parliament of Ghana .
Revised: Justice Daniel Francis Kweipe Annan (November 7, 1928 – July 16, 2006) was Speaker of the Parliament of Ghana .
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Original:  He is also a former member of the Provisional National Defence Council government which preceded the fourth republic and was once the Chairman of the National Commission for Democracy.
Revised:  He is also a former member of the Provisional National Defence Council government which governed Ghana prior the fourth republic and was once the Chairman of the National Commission for Democracy.
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Original:  He is also a former member of the Provisional National Defence Council government which preceded the fourth republic and was once the Chairman of the National Commission for Democracy.
Revised:  He is also a former member of the Provisional National Defence Council government which preceded the fourth republic and was Chairman of the National Commission for Democracy.
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Original:  His parentswere Victor Benjamin Annan ,from Accra and Mary Nyaniba Annan ,also from Accra and a granddaughter of Tackie Tawia I of Accra.
Revised:  His parentswere Victor Benjamin Annan ,from Accra and Mary Nyaniba Annan . Annan's maternal great-grandfather was Tackie Tawia I of Accra.
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Original:  In 1933, the Annan family relocated to Accra in Ghana.
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Original:  His family is Jewish and were subjected to religious and political oppression in the Soviet Union .
Revised:  His family were subjected to religious and political oppression in the Soviet Union .
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Original: American male voice actors Category:American people of Russian-Jewish descent Category:Burials at Hollywood Forever Cemetery Category:Jewish American male actors Category:Male actors from Saint Petersburg Category:People from Saint Petersburg Category:People from Studio City, Los Angeles Category:People with cystic fibrosis Category:Road incident deaths in California Category:Russian emigrants to the United States Category:University of Southern California alum
Revised: American male voice actors Category:American people of Russian-Jewish descent Category:Burials at Hollywood Forever Cemetery Category:Jewish American male actors Category:Male actors from Saint Petersburg Category:People from Saint Petersburg Category:People from Studio City, Los Angeles Category:People with cystic fibrosis Category:Road incident deaths in California Category:Russian emigrants to the United States Category:University of Southern California alumni Category:21st-century American Je
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Original: In June 2020, the 2015 Jeep Grand Cherokee was recalled again for similar rollaway problems.
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Original: Short Broken Horses Jacob HeckumVidhu Vinod Chopra The Driftless Area PierreZachary Sluser Green Room PatJeremy Saulnier Unity NarratorShaun Monson Documentary 2016 Rise BasilDavid Karlak Short film Star Trek Beyond Pavel ChekovJustin Lin Posthumous release | Dedicated In Memory Porto Jake KleemanGabe Klinger 2017 Thoroughbreds TimCory Finley Posthumous release Final filmed role Rememory ToddMark Palansky Posthumous release We Don't Belong Here Maxwell GreenPeer Pedersen 2019 Love,
Revised: Short Broken Horses Jacob HeckumVidhu Vinod Chopra The Driftless Area PierreZachary Sluser Green Room PatJeremy Saulnier Unity NarratorShaun Monson Documentary 2016 Rise BasilDavid Karlak Short film Star Trek Beyond Pavel ChekovJustin Lin Posthumous release Porto Jake KleemanGabe Klinger 2017 Thoroughbreds TimCory Finley Posthumous release Final filmed role Rememory ToddMark Palansky Posthumous release We Don't Belong Here Maxwell GreenPeer Pedersen 2019 Love,
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Original: Short Broken Horses Jacob HeckumVidhu Vinod Chopra The Driftless Area PierreZachary Sluser Green Room PatJeremy Saulnier Unity NarratorShaun Monson Documentary 2016 Rise BasilDavid Karlak Short film Star Trek Beyond Pavel ChekovJustin Lin Posthumous release | Dedicated In Memory Porto Jake KleemanGabe Klinger 2017 Thoroughbreds TimCory Finley Posthumous release Final filmed role Rememory ToddMark Palansky Posthumous release We Don't Belong Here Maxwell GreenPeer Pedersen 2019 Love,
Revised: Short Broken Horses Jacob HeckumVidhu Vinod Chopra The Driftless Area PierreZachary Sluser Green Room PatJeremy Saulnier Unity NarratorShaun Monson Documentary 2016 Rise BasilDavid Karlak Short film Star Trek Beyond Pavel ChekovJustin Lin Posthumous release | Dedicated In Memory Porto Jake KleemanGabe Klinger 2017 Thoroughbreds TimCory Finley Rememory ToddMark Palansky Posthumous release We Don't Belong Here Maxwell GreenPeer Pedersen 2019 Love,
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Original: Short Broken Horses Jacob HeckumVidhu Vinod Chopra The Driftless Area PierreZachary Sluser Green Room PatJeremy Saulnier Unity NarratorShaun Monson Documentary 2016 Rise BasilDavid Karlak Short film Star Trek Beyond Pavel ChekovJustin Lin Posthumous release | Dedicated In Memory Porto Jake KleemanGabe Klinger 2017 Thoroughbreds TimCory Finley Posthumous release Final filmed role Rememory ToddMark Palansky Posthumous release We Don't Belong Here Maxwell GreenPeer Pedersen 2019 Love,
Revised: Short Broken Horses Jacob HeckumVidhu Vinod Chopra The Driftless Area PierreZachary Sluser Green Room PatJeremy Saulnier Unity NarratorShaun Monson Documentary 2016 Rise BasilDavid Karlak Short film Star Trek Beyond Pavel ChekovJustin Lin Posthumous release | Dedicated In Memory Porto Jake KleemanGabe Klinger 2017 Thoroughbreds TimCory Finley Posthumous release Final filmed role Rememory ToddMark Palansky We Don't Belong Here Maxwell GreenPeer Pedersen 2019 Love,
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Original:  He maintained an active career up to his accidental death in 2016 when he was fatally injured by his SUV.
Revised:  He was fatally injured by his SUV.
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Original:  He maintained an active career up to his accidental death in 2016 when he was fatally injured by his SUV.
Revised:  He maintained an active career up to his accidental death in 2016 when he was fatally injured in 2016.
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Original:  The Performance of these films is affected by adhesive bond strength, thickness of the polyester, quality of application, and window structure/frame.
Revised:  The performance of these films is affected by adhesive bond strength, thickness of the polyester, quality of application, and window structure/frame.
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Original:  Citation as follows: URL
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Original:  Safety and security films can have components added, such as for solar control and decorative effects.
Revised: Window Films Types and Uses Safety and security films can have components added, such as for solar control and decorative effects.
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Original:  In 1998 he took over as the head of the Ichkeria  National Security Service (NSS).
Revised:  In 1998 he took over as the head of the Ichkeria 's National Security Service (NSS).
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Original:  Ibragim Khultygov himself was a target of assassination attempt in 1999.
Revised:  Ibragim himself was a target of assassination attempt in 1999.
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Original: CHECHEN SECURITY OFFICIAL ESCAPES ASSASSINATION ATTEMPT . Khultygov had surrendered to the Russians on August 7, 2000,Russia: Kremlin Claims Capture Of Chechen Leader allegedly  humiliated by the separatist leader Aslan Maskhadov.
Revised: CHECHEN SECURITY OFFICIAL ESCAPES ASSASSINATION ATTEMPT Khultygov had surrendered to the Russians on August 7, 2000,Russia: Kremlin Claims Capture Of Chechen Leader allegedly humiliated by the separatist leader Aslan Maskhadov.
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Original: CHECHEN SECURITY OFFICIAL ESCAPES ASSASSINATION ATTEMPT . Khultygov had surrendered to the Russians on August 7, 2000,Russia: Kremlin Claims Capture Of Chechen Leader allegedly  humiliated by the separatist leader Aslan Maskhadov.
Revised: CHECHEN SECURITY OFFICIAL ESCAPES ASSASSINATION ATTEMPT . He had surrendered to the Russians on August 7, 2000,Russia: Kremlin Claims Capture Of Chechen Leader allegedly humiliated by the separatist leader Aslan Maskhadov.
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Original: CHECHEN SECURITY OFFICIAL ESCAPES ASSASSINATION ATTEMPT . Khultygov had surrendered to the Russians on August 7, 2000,Russia: Kremlin Claims Capture Of Chechen Leader allegedly  humiliated by the separatist leader Aslan Maskhadov.
Revised: CHECHEN SECURITY OFFICIAL ESCAPES ASSASSINATION ATTEMPT . Khultygov had surrendered to the Russian forces on August 7, 2000,Russia: Kremlin Claims Capture Of Chechen Leader allegedly humiliated by the separatist leader Aslan Maskhadov.
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Original: CHECHEN SECURITY OFFICIAL ESCAPES ASSASSINATION ATTEMPT . Khultygov had surrendered to the Russians on August 7, 2000,Russia: Kremlin Claims Capture Of Chechen Leader allegedly  humiliated by the separatist leader Aslan Maskhadov.
Revised: CHECHEN SECURITY OFFICIAL ESCAPES ASSASSINATION ATTEMPT . Khultygov had surrendered to the Russians on August 7, 2000,Russia: Kremlin Claims Capture Of Chechen Leader allegedly after being humiliated by the separatist leader Aslan Maskhadov.
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Original:  After being amnestied Khultygov became a commander of a special forces unit belonging to the pro-Moscow "Kadyrovtsy" militiasEx-director of Ichkerian counter-intelligence now heads special unit of Kadyrov's security service and eventually also a member of Chechnya 's loyalist parliament.
Revised:  Khultygov then became a commander of a special forces unit belonging to the pro-Moscow "Kadyrovtsy" militiasEx-director of Ichkerian counter-intelligence now heads special unit of Kadyrov's security service and eventually also a member of Chechnya 's loyalist parliament.
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