wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  It appears that many members of the church (also known  Mormons) donated to the "Yes on 8" campaign.
Revised:  It appears that many members of the church (also known as Mormons) donated to the "Yes on 8" campaign.
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Original:  A breakdown of support for Proposition 8 in California Protesters have claimed that the church's institution made small cash donations to the Proposition 8 campaign, though no evidence has yet surfaced to collaborate the claims.
Revised:  A breakdown of support for Proposition 8 in California Protesters have claimed that the church's institution made small cash donations to the Proposition 8 campaign, though no evidence has yet surfaced to corroborate the claims.
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Original:  The temple is located in the city of Los Angeles, California , in the United States of America .
Revised:  The temple is located in Los Angeles, California , in the United States of America .
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Original:  The temple is located in the city of Los Angeles, California , in the United States of America .
Revised:  The temple is located in the city of Los Angeles, California .
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Original:  Graphic content Tehran blast scene photos from Fars News Agency Tehran blast scene photos from Iranian Students News Agency Ahwaz blast photos from Fars News Agency Ahwaz blast photos from Iranian Students News Agency Iran hit by wave of bombings, blames US Iranian opposition denies bombing rol
Revised:  Graphic content Tehran blast scene photos from Fars News Agency Tehran blast scene photos from Iranian Students News Agency Ahwaz blast photos from Fars News Agency Ahwaz blast photos from Iranian Students News Agenc
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Original: Ali Aghomohammadi , head press secretary for the security servies at first refused to implicate the MeK in the attacks, but later asserted that the bombs “may have been the work of people who belong to the [Mojahedin]."
Revised: Ali Agha Mohammadi , head press secretary for the security servies at first refused to implicate the MeK in the attacks, but later asserted that the bombs “may have been the work of people who belong to the [Mojahedin]."
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Original:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all.   
Revised:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all. " 
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Original:   "O'Leary, O'Reilly, O'Hare and O'Hara, There's no one as Irish as Barack O'Bama," states the song.
Revised:  Barack Obama "O'Leary, O'Reilly, O'Hare and O'Hara, There's no one as Irish as Barack O'Bama," states the song.
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Original: Moneygall, the village which Obama's great grandfather reportedly comes from A song proclaiming that US president-elect Barack Obama is Irish has got more then 600,000 views on video sharing site YouTube, with many of those views coming after his election last week.
Revised: Moneygall, the village which Obama's great grandfather reportedly comes from A song proclaiming that United States president-elect Barack Obama is Irish has got more then 600,000 views on video sharing site YouTube, with many of those views coming after his election last week.
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Original:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all . "  Moneygall is located on the border of the Irish county of Offaly.
Revised:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all , " Moneygall is located on the border of the Irish county of Offaly.
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Original:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all . "  Moneygall is located on the border of the Irish county of Offaly.
Revised:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all . " says the song. Moneygall is located on the border of the Irish county of Offaly.
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Original:  It is promariliy residential although it also features open space around t he edge of the village and non-residential buildings in the centre.
Revised:  It is primarily residential although it also features open space around t he edge of the village and non-residential buildings in the centre.
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Original:  It is promariliy residential although it also features open space around t he edge of the village and non-residential buildings in the centre.
Revised:  It is promariliy residential although it also features open space around the edge of the village and non-residential buildings in the centre.
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Original:  The village has one main road, and a few smaller roads leading off it.
Revised:  The village has one main road, and a few smaller roads leading out of it.
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Original:  Obama, who won the recent US election as the Democratic presidential nominee, won 360 electoral votes, more than enough to clinch the Presidency of the United States.
Revised:  Obama, who won the recent U.S. election as the Democratic presidential nominee, won 360 electoral votes, more than enough to clinch the Presidency of the United States.
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Original: Moneygall, the village which Obama's great grandfather reportedly comes from A song proclaiming that United States president-elect Barack Obama is Irish has got more than 600,000 views on video sharing site YouTube, with many of those views coming after he was elected on November 4. Barack Obama "O'Leary, O'Reilly, O'Hare and O'Hara, There's no one as Irish as Barack O'Bama," states the song.
Revised: Moneygall, the village which Obama's great grandfather reportedly comes from A song proclaiming that United States president-elect Barack Obama is Irish has got more then 600,000 views on video sharing site YouTube, with many of those views coming after he was elected on November 4. Barack Obama "O'Leary, O'Reilly, O'Hare and O'Hara, There's no one as Irish as Barack O'Bama," states the song.
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Original: Moneygall, the village which Obama's great grandfather reportedly comes from A song proclaiming that United States president-elect Barack Obama is Irish has got more then 600,000 views on video sharing site YouTube, with many of those views coming after he was elected on November 4. Barack Obama "O'Leary, O'Reilly, O'Hare and O'Hara, There's no one as Irish as Barack O'Bama," states the song.
Revised: Moneygall, the village which Obama's great grandfather reportedly comes from A song proclaiming that United States president-elect Barack Obama is Irish has got more than 600,000 views on video sharing site YouTube, with many of those views coming after he was elected on November 4. Barack Obama "O'Leary, O'Reilly, O'Hare and O'Hara, There's no one as Irish as Barack O'Bama," states the song.
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Original:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all , " says the song .
Revised:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all " says the song .
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Original:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all , " says the song .
Revised:  His granddaddy's daddy came from Moneygall, a small Irish village, well known to you all , " .
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Original:  The agent was using his official secret service vehicle and was also in full uniform at the time of the arrest.
Revised:  The Secret Service officer was using his official secret service vehicle and was also in full uniform at the time of the arrest.
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Original:  After agreeing on a price, the undercover officer told the agent to drive around the corner, where the sex act would take place.
Revised:  After agreeing on a price, the undercover officer told the Secret Service officer to drive around the corner, where the sex act would take place.
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Original:  The Secret Service officer was using his official secret service patrol car, which was marked, and was also in full uniform at the time of the arrest.
Revised:  The Secret Service officer was using his official Secret Service patrol car, which was marked, and was also in full uniform at the time of the arrest.
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Original:  The figures for Q3 handset sales in the United States came from NPD Group  
Revised:  The figures for Q3 handset sales in the United States came from NPD Group . 
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Original:  The figures for Q3 handset sales in the United States came from NPD Group  
Revised:  The figures for Q3 handset sales in the United States came from NPD Group Related new
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Original: iPhone by Apple Apple Computer beat rival Research In Motion (RIM) in sales of smartphones for the first time in the third quarter of 2008.
Revised: iPhone by Apple Apple Inc. beat rival Research In Motion (RIM) in sales of smartphones for the first time in the third quarter of 2008.
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Original:  Parex Bank operates in 14 countries, including Sweden, Estonia and Germany, and is the largest locally-owned Latvian bank
Revised:  Parex Bank operates in 14 countries, including Sweden, Estonia and Germany, and is the largest locally-owned Latvian ban
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Original: left Today , Latvia's government took over Parex Bank, the second largest bank in Latvia.
Revised: left Yesterday , Latvia's government took over Parex Bank, the second largest bank in Latvia.
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Original:  A Reuters report  quoted board member Liga Purina as saying that withdrawals today are above average, thought there are no queues.
Revised:  A Reuters report quoted board member Liga Purina as saying that withdrawals are above average, thought there are no queues.
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Original:  A Reuters report yesterday quoted board member Liga Purina as saying that withdrawals are above average, thought there are no queues.
Revised:  A Reuters report yesterday quoted board member Liga Purina as saying that withdrawals are above average, thought there are few queues.
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Original:  A Reuters report yesterday quoted board member Liga Purina as saying that withdrawals are above average, thought there are few queues.
Revised:  A Reuters report yesterday quoted board member Liga Purina as saying that withdrawals are above average, though there are few queues.
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Original:  The department says a risk assessment showed temperatures of 40 to 50ºC (104 to 122w:FahrenheitºF were dangerous for people crossing the desert.
Revised:  The department says a risk assessment showed temperatures of 40 to 50ºC (104 to 122ºF were dangerous for people crossing the desert.
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Original: “ We’re very keen to encourage safe and responsible use of the desert;
Revised: " We’re very keen to encourage safe and responsible use of the desert;
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Original:  “ It’s just such a vast and inhospitable place during summer, there are no trees and there is no shade and it’s so hot, it really is one of the most inhospitable places in Australia if not in the world.
Revised:  " It’s just such a vast and inhospitable place during summer, there are no trees and there is no shade and it’s so hot, it really is one of the most inhospitable places in Australia if not in the world.
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Original:  ” People caught by park rangers crossing the desert will face fines of up to  $1,000
Revised:  " People caught by park rangers crossing the desert will face fines of up to $1,000
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Original:  ” People caught by park rangers crossing the desert will face fines of up to  $1,000
Revised:  ” People caught by park rangers crossing the desert will face fines of up to A $1,000
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Original:  The department says a risk assessment showed temperatures of 40 to 50ºC (104 to 122ºF  were dangerous for people crossing the desert.
Revised:  The department says a risk assessment showed temperatures of 40 to 50ºC (104 to 122ºF ) were dangerous for people crossing the desert.
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Original:  High temperatures can also cause vehicles to overheat, vaporise fuel, blow tyres and for batteries to fail.
Revised:  High temperatures can also cause vehicles to overheat, vaporise fuel, blow tires and for batteries to fail.
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Original: The ocean liner Queen Elizabeth II , popularly known as the QE2, has arrived in her home port of Southampton for the last time.
Revised: The ocean liner Queen Elizabeth 2 , popularly known as the QE2, has arrived in her home port of Southampton for the last time.
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Original:  The QE2 will leave Southampton for the final time this evening at 1915 GMT  
Revised:  The QE2 will leave Southampton for the final time this evening at 1915 GMT . 
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Original: The ocean liner Queen Elizabeth 2, popularly known as the QE2, has arrived in her home port of Southampton for the last time.
Revised: The ocean liner Queen Elizabeth 2, popularly known as the QE2, has arrived in her home port of Southampton , England for the final time.
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Original: Tuesday evening, ocean liner Queen Elizabeth 2, popularly known as the QE2, has arrived in her home port of Southampton, England for the final time.
Revised: Tuesday evening, famed ocean liner, Queen Elizabeth 2, popularly known as the QE2, has arrived in her home port of Southampton, England for the final time.
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Original: Tuesday evening, ocean liner Queen Elizabeth 2, popularly known as the QE2, has arrived in her home port of Southampton, England for the final time.
Revised: Tuesday evening, ocean liner Queen Elizabeth 2, popularly known as the QE2, arrived in her home port of Southampton, England for the final time.
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Original:  The Cunard ship has been in service since 1969, and is to become a floating hotel in Dubai.
Revised:  The Cunard Line ship has been in service since 1969, and is to become a floating hotel in Dubai.
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Original:  The  ship hit the sandbank at around 0530 GMT, and five tugs took around 30 minutes to pull the QE2 clear.
Revised:  The The ship hit the sandbank at around 0530 GMT, and five tugs took around 30 minutes to pull the QE2 clear.
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Original:  The Queen Elizabeth 2 has been referred to as the "world's most famous ship" and has been a popular sight throughout her four decade career, taking passengers from Southampton on transatlantic cruises to New York and the Caribbean as well as he Mediterranean.
Revised:  The QE2 has been referred to as the "world's most famous ship" and has been a popular sight throughout her four decade career, taking passengers from Southampton on transatlantic cruises to New York and the Caribbean as well as he Mediterranean.
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Original: Tuesday evening , famed ocean liner, Queen Elizabeth 2, popularly known as the QE2, arrived in her home port of Southampton, England for the final time.
Revised: Tuesday , famed ocean liner, Queen Elizabeth 2, popularly known as the QE2, arrived in her home port of Southampton, England for the final time.
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Original:  For her conversion to a hotel, her distinctive funnel is to be removed and replaced by a steel and glass replica, which will house a penthouse suite  
Revised:  For her conversion to a hotel, her distinctive funnel is to be removed and replaced by a steel and glass replica, which will house a penthouse suite . 
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Original:  Its final destination will be as part of a Nakheel Properties' resort  
Revised:  Its final destination will be as part of a Nakheel Properties' resort . 
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Original: NASA officials have decided to call an end to the Mars Phoenix Mission, after Winter took hold of the Red Planet . NASA calls the mission a total success.
Revised: NASA officials have decided to call an end to the Mars Phoenix Mission, after winter took hold of the Red Planet . NASA calls the mission a total success.
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Original: NASA officials have decided to call an end to the Mars Phoenix Mission, after Winter took hold of the Red Planet . NASA calls the mission a total success.
Revised: NASA officials have decided to call an end to the Mars Phoenix Mission, after Winter took hold of the red planet . NASA calls the mission a total success.
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Original:  Phoenix was responsible for several discoveries on Mars, including the of finding water-ice.
Revised:  Phoenix was responsible for several discoveries on Mars, including the finding of water-ice.
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Original:  Phoenix was responsible for several discoveries on Mars, including the confirmation of the presence of water-ice, which had previously only been detected from space.
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Original:  NASA officials will continue to listen for a signal from Phoenix, in hopes that it will phone home again in the near future
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Original:  The second largestelectronics retailer also announced that it would close down 155 of its locations leaving  8000 employees jobless.
Revised:  The second largestelectronics retailer also announced that it would close down 155 of its locations leaving an estimated 8000 employees jobless.
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Original:  Even more retailers are cutting back as CompUSA closed most of its stores during the holiday season in 2007.
Revised:  Other retailers are also cutting back. CompUSA closed most of its stores during the holiday season in 2007.
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Original:  “ Circuit City was incredibly successful in the 1980s and 1990s, but they never changed after that, ” says David Schick, an analyst at Stifel Nicolaus
Revised:  " Circuit City was incredibly successful in the 1980s and 1990s, but they never changed after that, ” says David Schick, an analyst at Stifel Nicolaus
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Original:  “ Circuit City was incredibly successful in the 1980s and 1990s, but they never changed after that, ” says David Schick, an analyst at Stifel Nicolaus
Revised:  “ Circuit City was incredibly successful in the 1980s and 1990s, but they never changed after that, " says David Schick, an analyst at Stifel Nicolaus
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Original: In August  Best Buy reported that there sales profits have gone up of the quarterly profit of $200 million.
Revised: In August , Best Buy reported that there sales profits have gone up of the quarterly profit of $200 million.
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Original: In August  Best Buy reported that there sales profits have gone up of the quarterly profit of $200 million.
Revised: In August Best Buy reported that its profits had gone up to show a quarterly profit of $200 million.
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Original:  The reason behind Circuit City’s downfall was that the company didn ’ t secure prime real estate locations making customers go to more convenient locations like Wal-Mart.
Revised:  The reason behind Circuit City’s downfall was that the company didn ' t secure prime real estate locations making customers go to more convenient locations like Wal-Mart.
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Original:  The company also failed when they stopped selling appliances and missed out in big store promotions like the company Apple Computers
Revised:  The company also failed when they stopped selling appliances and missed out in big store promotions like the company Apple Inc.
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Original: On Monday, United States electronics retailer Circuit City  announced that it would file for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection.
Revised: On Monday, United States electronics retailer Circuit City () announced that it would file for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection.
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Original: On Monday, United States electronics retailer Circuit City () announced that it would file for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection.
Revised: On Monday, United States electronics retailer Circuit City announced that it would file for Chapter 11 bankruptcy protection.
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Original: In August, Best Buy, the biggest American retailer in this class, reported that its profits had gone up to show a quarterly profit of US$200 million.
Revised: In August, Best Buy, reported that its profits had gone up to show a quarterly profit of US$200 million.
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Original:  Chen claims that the purpose of this was to fund "secret diplomatic missions" and not his own personal gain  
Revised:  Chen claims that the purpose of this was to fund "secret diplomatic missions" and not his own personal gain . 
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Original:  We assure the public that the DPP will not be defeated," said Lee Chun-yee  . Chen is a lawyer by profession and served as the President of the Republic of China (Taiwan) from May 20, 2000 through May 20, 2008 
Revised:  We assure the public that the DPP will not be defeated," said Lee Chun-yee . Chen is a lawyer by profession and served as the President of the Republic of China (Taiwan) from May 20, 2000 through May 20, 2008. 
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Original: Taiwan has arrested former president Chen Shui-bian  on charges of money laundering, embezzling government funds, taking bribes and forging documents.
Revised: Former Taiwanese President Chen Shui-bian on charges of money laundering, embezzling government funds, taking bribes and forging documents.
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Original:  However, court proceedings were halted and authorities took him to a hospitalafter he requested medical attention .
Revised:  However, court proceedings were halted so that he could be taken to hospital, due to an injury sustained after he was detained .
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Original:  Chen has publicly admitted that his wife wired tens of millions of dollars overseas, but without his knowledge .
Revised:  Chen has publicly admitted that his wife wired tens of millions of dollars oversea, but denies any wrongdoing .
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Original:  He has also admitted to getting government money by submitting false receipts . Chen claims that the purpose of this was  to fund "secret diplomatic missions" and not his own personal gain . Chen, his wife, son, daughter-in-law , and brother-in-law all been named defendants in a separate money laundering case
Revised:  He has also admitted to getting government money by submitting false receipts , though he claims that the purpose of this was to fund "secret diplomatic missions" and not his own personal gain . Chen, his wife, son, daughter-in-law , and brother-in-law all been named defendants in a separate money laundering case
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Original:  He has also admitted to getting government money by submitting false receipts . Chen claims that the purpose of this was  to fund "secret diplomatic missions" and not his own personal gain . Chen, his wife, son, daughter-in-law , and brother-in-law all been named defendants in a separate money laundering case
Revised:  He has also admitted to getting government money by submitting false receipts . Chen claims that the purpose of this was only to fund "secret diplomatic missions" and not his own personal gain . Chen, his wife, son, daughter-in-law , and brother-in-law all been named defendants in a separate money laundering case
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Original:  He has also admitted to getting government money by submitting false receipts . Chen claims that the purpose of this was  to fund "secret diplomatic missions" and not his own personal gain . Chen, his wife, son, daughter-in-law , and brother-in-law all been named defendants in a separate money laundering case
Revised:  He has also admitted to getting government money by submitting false receipts . Chen claims that the purpose of this was to fund "secret diplomatic missions" and not benefit himself . Chen, his wife, son, daughter-in-law , and brother-in-law all been named defendants in a separate money laundering case
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