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Original:  Ann Arbor, Michigan based goal keeper Betsey Armstrong had seven saves in net for her team.
Revised:  , based goal keeper Betsey Armstrong had seven saves in net for her team.
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Original:  The gold medal game is to be played at 19:00 local time in Changshu , China immediately following the bronze medal match between China and Greece being played at 17:40 local time.
Revised:  The gold medal game is to be played at 19:00 local time in , China immediately following the bronze medal match between China and Greece being played at 17:40 local time.
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Original:  Greece performed better than Team USA during power plays, capitalising on one of there three shots while the United States was unable to score on any of their six opportunities.
Revised:  Greece performed better than Team USA during power plays, capitalising on one of their three shots while the United States was unable to score on any of their six opportunities.
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Original:  It will be a rematch of  VISA Water Polo International final, which Australia won.
Revised:  It will be a rematch of the VISA Water Polo International final, which Australia won.
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Original:  In the qualifying game between the United States and Greece, Courtney Mathewson and Kami Craig led the United States in scoring with two goals each. ,  based goal keeper Betsey Armstrong had seven saves in net for her team.
Revised:  In the qualifying game between the United States and Greece, Courtney Mathewson and Kami Craig led the United States in scoring with two goals each. , Michigan based goal keeper Betsey Armstrong had seven saves in net for her team.
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Original:  Sen. Charles Schumer (D) is reported to have proposed a different bill  
Revised:  Sen. Charles Schumer (D) is reported to have proposed a different bill . 
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Original:  The increase was  $1 to $6.15.
Revised:  The increase was of $1 to $6.15.
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Original:  The new wage will become effective on January 1st .
Revised:  The new minimum will become effective on January 1st .
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Original:  This is the first raise in North Carolina 's minimum wage in nearly nine year     
Revised:  This is the first raise to the North Carolina minimum wage in nearly nine year 
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Original:  This is the first raise in North Carolina 's minimum wage in nearly nine year     
Revised:  This is the first raise in North Carolina 's minimum wage in nearly nine years. 
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Original:  The last time Pennsylvania made a change to the fedrally mandate minimum was in 1988.
Revised:  The last time Pennsylvania made a change to the federally mandate minimum was in 1988.
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Original:  Easley said that the new law will make it easier for North Carolinians to deal with  rising cost of living.
Revised:  Easley said that the new law will make it easier for North Carolinians to deal with the rising cost of living.
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Original:  The new minimum will become effective on January 1 next year.
Revised:  The new law will become effective on January 1 next year.
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Original:  On Sunday a week ago in Pennsylvania, Governor Ed Rendell signed into law  phased-in $2 minimum wage increase.
Revised:  Last Sunday in Pennsylvania, Governor Ed Rendell signed into law phased-in $2 minimum wage increase.
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Original:  On Sunday a week ago in Pennsylvania, Governor Ed Rendell signed into law  phased-in $2 minimum wage increase.
Revised:  On Sunday a week ago in Pennsylvania, Governor Ed Rendell signed into law a phased-in $2 minimum wage increase.
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Original:  For businesses with 10 employees or more, on January 1 next year the rate will increase by $ 1 , then again increase by another dollar on July 1. "Signing this bill into law gives me personal gratification," Rendell said to cheering crowd of minimum wage workers at the signing ceremony in Philadelphia.
Revised:  For businesses with 10 employees or more, on January 1 next year the rate will increase by $ 1 on January 1 next year, then increase by another dollar on July 1. "Signing this bill into law gives me personal gratification," Rendell said to cheering crowd of minimum wage workers at the signing ceremony in Philadelphia.
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Original:  For businesses with 10 employees or more, on January 1 next year the rate will increase by $ 1 , then again increase by another dollar on July 1. "Signing this bill into law gives me personal gratification," Rendell said to cheering crowd of minimum wage workers at the signing ceremony in Philadelphia.
Revised:  For businesses with 10 employees or more, on January 1 next year the rate will increase by $ 1 , then again increase by another dollar on July 1. "Signing this bill into law gives me personal gratification," said Rendell to cheering crowd of minimum wage workers at the signing ceremony in Philadelphia.
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Original:  Recent state level legislative initiatives to raise the minimum wage has failed in 18 U.S. states, according to the National Restaurant Association.
Revised:  Recent state level legislative initiatives to raise the minimum wage have failed in 18 U.S. states, according to the National Restaurant Association.
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Original:  The last time the feds raised the rate was in 1997
Revised:  The last time the federal government raised the rate was in 1997
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Original:  The increase of $1 will raise the rate to $ 6.15.
Revised:  The increase of US$1 will raise the rate to US$ 6.15.
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Original: (6) Bronwen Knox during a test match between Great Britain and Australia earlier in the year |alt=water polo players|thumb In the gold medal match in water polo's FINA World League Final tonight between the and , Australia lost 4–6  in the last major competition before the 2012 Summer Olympics.
Revised: (6) Bronwen Knox during a test match between Great Britain and Australia earlier in the year |alt=water polo players|thumb In the gold medal match at water polo's FINA World League Final tonight between the and , Australia lost 4–6 in the last major competition before the 2012 Summer Olympics.
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Original:  The victory is the seventh World League Super Final title for Team USA.
Revised:  The victory made for seven World League Super Final title for Team USA.
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Original:  The victory is the seventh World League Super Final title for Team USA.
Revised:  The victory is the seventh World League Super Final titles for Team USA.
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Original:  Shanghai time, 9:00 p.m. Eastern Australian time, the game got under way with a Tweet from Australian Water Polo for fans at home who could not watch the game live.
Revised:  Chinese local time, 9:00 p.m. Eastern Australian time, the game got under way with a Tweet from Australian Water Polo for fans at home who could not watch the game live.
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Original:  The Australians were down at quarter time,  1–2 with the team's only goal coming from off a pass by .
Revised:  The Australians were down at quarter time, down 1–2 with the team's only goal coming from off a pass by .
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Original:  By half time, Australia had battled back to take the lead 4–3 , only to finish the third period tied 4–4 with the United States, ultimately losing 4–6.
Revised:  By half time, Australia had battled back to take the lead 4–3 only to finish the third period tied 4–4 with the United States, ultimately losing 4–6.
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Original:  By half time, Australia had battled back to take the lead 4–3 , only to finish the third period tied 4–4 with the United States, ultimately losing 4–6.
Revised:  By half time, Australia had battled back to take the lead 4–3 , only to finish the third period tied 4–4 with the United States, and eventually lose 4–6.
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Original:  During their week long preparation, they worked on strength and fitness training.
Revised:  During their week long preparation, they worked strength and fitness training.
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Original:  When away from the pool, they did not have access to Twitter, Facebook or television , and had to entertain themselves using other means.
Revised:  When away from the pool, they did not have access to Twitter, Facebook or television and had to entertain themselves using other means.
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Original:  Going into their match against the USA, they notched up an 8–7 victory over China,, an 18 to nil victory against Germany and a 9–7 overtime shootout win against Russia.
Revised:  Going into their match against the USA, they notched an 8–7 victory over China,, an 18 to nil victory against Germany and a 9–7 overtime shootout win against Russia.
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Original:  Earlier in the afternoon, prior to game time  , Channel 9 in Australia ran a feature on the team.
Revised:  Earlier in the afternoon, prior to game time in Australia , Channel 9 in Australia ran a feature on the team.
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Original:  Earlier in the afternoon, prior to game time  , Channel 9 in Australia ran a feature on the team.
Revised:  Earlier in the afternoon, prior to game time , Channel 9 ran a feature on the team.
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Original:  Before the start of the game, the Australian Stingers official team Twitter account mocked Team USA for their team branded shoulder strapping tape.
Revised:  Prior to the start of the game, the Australian Stingers official team Twitter account mocked Team USA for their team branded shoulder strapping tape.
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Original:  Before the start of the game, the Australian Stingers official team Twitter account mocked Team USA for their team branded shoulder strapping tape.
Revised:  Before the start of the game, the Australian Stingers official team Twitter account mocked Team USA for their team branded k tape.
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Original:  The bronze medal match between the and preceded the gold medal game . Greece won 8–7, scoring 2– 1  in the first, 2– 4  in the second, 2– 1  in the third and 2– 1  in the fourth.
Revised:  The bronze medal match between the and preceded the gold medal game , which Greece won 8–7, scoring 2– 1 in the first, 2– 4 in the second, 2– 1 in the third and 2– 1 in the fourth.
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Original:  The bronze medal match between the and preceded the gold medal game . Greece won 8–7, scoring 2– 1  in the first, 2– 4  in the second, 2– 1  in the third and 2– 1  in the fourth.
Revised:  The bronze medal match between the and preceded the gold medal game . Greece won 8–7, scoring 2– 1 in the first, 2– 4 in the second, 1 in the third and 2– 1 in the fourth.
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Original:  In the other match, easily beat 18–4.
Revised:  In the other match, easily beat 18-4.
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Original:  Australian local time, the game got under way  with a Tweet from Australian Water Polo for fans at home who could not watch the game live.
Revised:  Australian local time, the game got under way , with a Tweet from Australian Water Polo for fans at home who could not watch the game live.
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Original:  The Australians were down at quarter time, down 1–2 with the team's only goal coming from off a pass by .
Revised:  The Australians were down at quarter time, 1–2 with the team's only goal coming from off a pass by .
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Original:  By half time, Australia had battled back to take the lead 4–3  only to finish the third period tied 4–4 with the United States, and eventually lose 4–6.
Revised:  By half time, Australia had battled back to take the lead 4–3 , only to finish the third period tied 4–4 with the United States, and eventually lose 4–6.
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Original:  While in Singapore, players had an opportunity to relax at the pool and several, including Knox, , ,  and were very active on Twitter and Instragram.
Revised:  While in Singapore, players had an opportunity to relax at the pool and several, including Knox, , , , and were very active on Twitter and Instragram.
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Original:  During their week long preparation, they worked strength and fitness training.
Revised:  During their week-long preparation, they worked strength and fitness training.
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Original:  When away from the pool, they did not have access to Twitter, Facebook  or television and had to entertain themselves using other means.
Revised:  When away from the pool, they did not have access to Twitter, Facebook , or television and had to entertain themselves using other means.
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Original:  Several of the players who were active on Twitter before departing for China stopped updating, including Webster, Rippon  and Zagame.
Revised:  Several of the players who were active on Twitter before departing for China stopped updating, including Webster, Rippon , and Zagame.
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Original:  Going into their match against the USA, they notched an 8–7 victory over China, , an 18 to nil victory against Germany  and a 9–7 overtime shootout win against Russia.
Revised:  Going into their match against the USA, they notched an 8–7 victory over China, an 18 to nil victory against Germany and a 9–7 overtime shootout win against Russia.
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Original:  Going into their match against the USA, they notched an 8–7 victory over China, , an 18 to nil victory against Germany  and a 9–7 overtime shootout win against Russia.
Revised:  Going into their match against the USA, they notched an 8–7 victory over China, , an 18 to nil victory against Germany , and a 9–7 overtime shootout win against Russia.
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Original:  Prior to the start of the game, the Australian Stingers official team Twitter account mocked Team USA for their team branded k tape . During the pre-game warm up, team members did a variety of things including playing with their phones, warming up  and getting their arms taped.
Revised:  Prior to the start of the game, the Australian Stingers official team Twitter account mocked Team USA for their team-branded . During the pre-game warm up, team members did a variety of things including playing with their phones, warming up and getting their arms taped.
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Original:  Prior to the start of the game, the Australian Stingers official team Twitter account mocked Team USA for their team branded k tape . During the pre-game warm up, team members did a variety of things including playing with their phones, warming up  and getting their arms taped.
Revised:  Prior to the start of the game, the Australian Stingers official team Twitter account mocked Team USA for their team branded k tape . During the pre-game warm up, team members did a variety of things including playing with their phones, warming up , and getting their arms taped.
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Original:  The bronze medal match between the and preceded the gold medal game, which Greece won 8–7, with quarter scoring of 1–2 in the first, 4–2 in the second, 1–2 in the third  and 1–2 in the fourth.
Revised:  The bronze medal match between the and preceded the gold medal game, which Greece won 8–7, with quarter scoring of 1–2 in the first, 4–2 in the second, 1–2 in the third , and 1–2 in the fourth.
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Original:  In the other match, easily beat 18-4.
Revised:  In the other match, the easily beat the 18-4.
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Original: (6) Bronwen Knox during a test match between Great Britain and Australia earlier in the year |alt=water polo players|thumb In the gold medal match at water polo's FINA World League Final tonight between the and , Australia lost 4–6 to the USA in the last major competition before the 2012 Summer Olympics .
Revised: (6) Bronwen Knox during a test match between Great Britain and Australia earlier in the year |alt=water polo players|thumb In the gold medal match at water polo's FINA World League Final tonight between the and , Australia lost 4–6 to the USA in the last major competition before the .
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Original:  While in Singapore, players had an opportunity to relax at the pool and several, including Knox, , , , and were very active on Twitter and Instragram .
Revised:  While in Singapore, players had an opportunity to relax at the pool and several, including Knox, , , , and were very active on Twitter and .
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Original:  Knox and Moran provided updates on Twitter and Instragram through out the competition.
Revised:  Knox and Moran provided updates on Twitter and Instagram through out the competition.
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Original:  During their week-long preparation, they worked  strength and fitness training.
Revised:  During their week-long preparation, they worked on strength and fitness training.
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Original:  Knox and Moran provided updates on Twitter and Instagram through out the competition.
Revised:  Knox and Moran provided updates on Twitter and Instagram throughout the competition.
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Original:  Knox and Moran provided updates on Twitter and Instagram throughout the competition.
Revised:  Knox and Moran continued to provide updates on Twitter and Instagram throughout the competition.
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Original:  While in Singapore, players had an opportunity to relax at the pool and several, including Knox, , , , and were very active on Twitter and .
Revised:  While in Singapore, players had an opportunity to relax at the pool and several, including Knox, , , and were very active on Twitter and .
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Original:  While in Singapore, players had an opportunity to relax at the pool and several, including Knox, , , , and were very active on Twitter and .
Revised:  While in Singapore, players had an opportunity to relax at the pool and several, including Knox, , , , and were very active on Twitter .
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Original:  Knox and Moran continued to provide updates on Twitter and Instagram throughout the competition.
Revised:  Knox and Moran continued to provide updates on Twitter and throughout the competition.
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Original: Several officials, but no players, from each club has also been suspended from football, including now ex-general manager Luciano Moggi and ex-chief executive Antonio Giraudo, both of Juventus, who have been baanned for five years.
Revised: Several officials, but no players, from each club has also been suspended from football, including now ex-general manager Luciano Moggi and ex-chief executive Antonio Giraudo, both of Juventus, who have been banned for five years.
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Original:  The FIGC (  Italian Football Federation  ) had originally called for all four clubs involved, AC Milan, Juventus, Lazio and Fiorentina to be thrown out of Serie A, with Juventus demoted two divisions into Serie C1.
Revised:  The FIGC ( w: Italian Football Federation ) had originally called for all four clubs involved, AC Milan, Juventus, Lazio and Fiorentina to be thrown out of Serie A, with Juventus demoted two divisions into Serie C1.
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Original:  The FIGC ( w: Italian Football Federation |Italian Football Federation ) had originally called for all four clubs involved, AC Milan, Juventus, Lazio and Fiorentina to be thrown out of Serie A, with Juventus demoted two divisions into Serie C1.
Revised:  The FIGC ( Italian Football Federation |Italian Football Federation ) had originally called for all four clubs involved, AC Milan, Juventus, Lazio and Fiorentina to be thrown out of Serie A, with Juventus demoted two divisions into Serie C1.
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Original:  The FIGC ( w: Italian Football Federation |Italian Football Federation ) had originally called for all four clubs involved, AC Milan, Juventus, Lazio and Fiorentina to be thrown out of Serie A, with Juventus demoted two divisions into Serie C1.
Revised:  The FIGC ( w: Italian Football Federation ) had originally called for all four clubs involved, AC Milan, Juventus, Lazio and Fiorentina to be thrown out of Serie A, with Juventus demoted two divisions into Serie C1.
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Original:  Israel earlier said that the ship was hit by a explosives-laden drone.
Revised:  Israel earlier said that the ship was hit by an explosives-laden drone.
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Original: thumb As the conflict in the Middle East goes into its fourth day, Israel launched more air strikes against targets in Lebanon.
Revised:  As the conflict in the Middle East goes into its fourth day, Israel launched more air strikes against targets in Lebanon.
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Original:  Lebanon 225px At least 35 Lebanese were killed in Israeli air strikes, including civilians.
Revised:  Lebanon At least 35 Lebanese were killed in Israeli air strikes, including civilians.
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Original: An Israeli missile incinerated the people inside a van near the southern port of Tyre, killing eight children and nine adults and also wounding six others (see) . Police said the vehicle the Israelis destroyed was carrying refugees fleeing the village of Marwaheen after Israel told them to flee via a loudspeaker announcement.
Revised: An Israeli missile incinerated the people inside a van near the southern port of Tyre, killing eight children and nine adults and also wounding six others . Police said the vehicle the Israelis destroyed was carrying refugees fleeing the village of Marwaheen after Israel told them to flee via a loudspeaker announcement.
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Original: Israel has given Syria a 72 hour ultimatum to stop Hezbollah ’ s activity, according to London-based Arabic language newspaper Al-Hayat and a senior source in the United States Pentagon or else Israel "would launch an offensive with disastrous consequences.".
Revised: Israel has given Syria a 72 hour ultimatum to stop Hezbollah ' s activity, according to London-based Arabic language newspaper Al-Hayat and a senior source in the United States Pentagon or else Israel "would launch an offensive with disastrous consequences.".
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Original:  About 300 youths gathered near Mr Turabi's house after the blast, weeping and chanting slogans against the US and Israe
Revised:  About 300 youths gathered near Mr Turabi's house after the blast, weeping and chanting slogans against the US and Israel
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Original:   Turabi had narrowly escaped an attempt on his life in April 2006 when a bomb was exploded just after his car crossed the area.
Revised:  Allama Turabi had narrowly escaped an attempt on his life in April 2006 when a bomb was exploded just after his car crossed the area.
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Original:  He was the leader of a Shia party, Islami Tehreek Pakistan, and a vice provincial chief for Mutahida Majlis-e-Amal Sindh  , an opposition religious coalition.
Revised:  He was the leader of a Shia party, Islami Tehreek Pakistan, and a vice provincial chief for Mutahida Majlis-e-Amal Sindh (MMA) , an opposition religious coalition.
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Original:  Manzoor Mughal, a police investigator, said a lone attacker on foot had detonated the bomb at the gate of Mr Turabi's house as he was getting into a car.
Revised:  Manzoor Mughal, a police investigator, said a lone attacker on foot had detonated the bomb at the gate of Allama Turabi's house as he was getting into a car.
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Original:  Mr Turabi died of his injuries at a private hospital in Karachi, and his guard, a cousin, and the attacker, were also killed.
Revised:  He died of his injuries at a private hospital in Karachi, and his guard, a cousin, and the attacker, were also killed.
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Original:  Hooker Jeremy Paul, No. 8 Scott Fava and inside center Matt Giteau were all moved into the starting lineup, with Rocky Elsom moving to blindside flanker.
Revised:  Hooker Jeremy Paul, No. 8 Scott Fava and inside center Giteau were all moved into the starting lineup, with Rocky Elsom moving to blindside flanker.
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Original:  Bulls winger Akona Ndugane and No. 8 Pierre Spies  
Revised:  Bulls winger Akona Ndugane and No. 8 Pierre Spies . 
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