wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Rapper Proof was shot and killed on 11 April 2006 at  4:30am at the Triple C Club on 8 Mile Road . Proof was known for his work together with  good friend Eminem and his group D12.
Revised: Rapper Proof was shot and killed on 11 April 2006 at 4:30am at the Triple C Club on 8 Mile Road . Proof was known for his work together with his good friend Eminem and his group D12.
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Original:  "Police said he is a cousin of Keith Bender Jr., the bouncer who was allegedly shot by Proof during the fight." "All Hip Hop" Man Suspected Of Fatally Shooting Rapper Proof Surrenders The fight that started inside the club was reported to be over a pool game.
Revised:  "Police said he is a cousin of Keith Bender Jr., the bouncer who was allegedly shot by Proof during the fight." The fight that started inside the club was reported to be over a pool game.
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Original:  FOX News police report on Proof's death Following Proof's death, rapper Snoop Dogg called on fellow musicians to unite, describing the incident as "a loss to the hip-hop community".
Revised:  Following Proof's death, rapper Snoop Dogg called on fellow musicians to unite, describing the incident as "a loss to the hip-hop community".
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Original:  "Seven News" Seven News reports on Snoop Dogg's reaction to Proof's death Eminem was the third to discuss Proof's death days after his passing, clearly affected by the tragedy.
Revised:  Eminem was the third to discuss Proof's death days after his passing, clearly affected by the tragedy.
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Original:  "D-12 Online - Eminem Tribute"
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Original: Tributes poured out of the UK with Vm2k6 The UK remembers Proof leading the rememberance.
Revised: Tributes poured out of the UK with Vm2k6 leading the rememberance.
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Original:  The "Good Die Young" clip was produced by RYKE Video URL
Revised:  The "Good Die Young" clip was produced by RYKE Video Productions.
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Original:  Based on international regulations, we will continue our path until we achieve production of industrial-scale enrichment," said Ahmadinejad on Tuesday .
Revised:  Based on international regulations, we will continue our path until we achieve production of industrial-scale enrichment," Ahmadinejad said .
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Original:  According to the IAEA , Iran began to test 20 centrifuges in March.
Revised:  According to the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) , Iran began to test 20 centrifuges in March.
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Original:  Washington DC is said to "be talking about the way forward with the other members of the Security Council and Germany about how to address this [Iran's nuclear program]," according to White House spokesman Scott McClellan  
Revised:  Washington DC is said to "be talking about the way forward with the other members of the Security Council and Germany about how to address this [Iran's nuclear program]," according to White House spokesman Scott McClellan . 
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Original:  In order to create a nuclear bomb, a few kilotons of uranium must be enriched to around 90\% of uranium-235.
Revised:  In order to create a nuclear bomb, a few kilotons of uranium must be used enriched above 90\% of uranium-235.
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Original:  We operated the first unit which comprises  164 centrifuges, gas was injected, and we got the industrial output.
Revised:  We operated the first unit which comprises of 164 centrifuges, gas was injected, and we got the industrial output.
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Original:  The preliminary agreement will see aircraft delivered to six airlines - Air China, China Eastern Airlines, China Southern Airlines, Hainan Airlines, Shanghai Airlines and Xiamen Airlines - in time for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
Revised:  In China, airliners are selected and purchased by the government, which then distributes them to different airlines. The Dreamliners will be delivered to six airlines - Air China, China Eastern Airlines, China Southern Airlines, Hainan Airlines, Shanghai Airlines and Xiamen Airlines - in time for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
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Original:  The preliminary agreement will see aircraft delivered to six airlines - Air China, China Eastern Airlines, China Southern Airlines, Hainan Airlines, Shanghai Airlines and Xiamen Airlines - in time for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
Revised:  The preliminary agreement will see aircraft delivered to six airlines - Air China, China Eastern Airlines, China Southern Airlines, Hainan Airlines, Shanghai Airlines and Xiamen Airlines . The deliveries are scheduled to be in time for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
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Original:  The aircraft - renamed from the 7E7  at the same time the deal was announced - will begin production in 2006 and  airline service in 2008.
Revised:  The aircraft was once named the 7E7 at the same time the deal was announced - will begin production in 2006 and airline service in 2008.
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Original:  The aircraft - renamed from the 7E7  at the same time the deal was announced - will begin production in 2006 and  airline service in 2008.
Revised:  The aircraft - renamed from the 7E7 at the same time the deal was announced . Boeing will begin production in 2006 and airline service in 2008.
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Original:  It will seat 200 to 300 people and will have a range of 3,500 to 8,500 nautical miles , and through the use of the latest materials and designs  will be 20\% more fuel efficient than the equivalent aircraft today.
Revised:  It will seat 200 to 300 people and will have a range of 3,500 to 8,500 nautical miles . Through the use of the latest materials and designs will be 20\% more fuel efficient than the equivalent aircraft today.
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Original:  It will seat 200 to 300 people and will have a range of 3,500 to 8,500 nautical miles , and through the use of the latest materials and designs  will be 20\% more fuel efficient than the equivalent aircraft today.
Revised:  It will seat 200 to 300 people and will have a range of 3,500 to 8,500 nautical miles , and through the use of the latest materials and designs it will be 20\% more fuel efficient than the equivalent aircraft today.
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Original:  Boeing will begin production in 2006 and the airchracft should enter airline service in 2008.
Revised:  Boeing will begin production in 2006 and the aircraft should enter airline service in 2008.
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Original:  He also told the inquiry that he couldn't recall if he noticed that nobody was taking notes as he would have been "focused a little more on the meeting than on somebody taking notes"  
Revised:  He also told the inquiry that he couldn't recall if he noticed that nobody was taking notes as he would have been "focused a little more on the meeting than on somebody taking notes" . 
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Original: When asked why the department of foreign affairs and trade did nothing about the allegations first received in 2000, he told the inquiry that his department couldn't investigate AWB and respoonsibility for the oil for food program layed with the UN.
Revised: When asked why the department of foreign affairs and trade did nothing about the allegations first received in 2000, he told the inquiry that his department couldn't investigate AWB and responsibility for the oil for food program layed with the UN.
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Original:  He was sacked from his post , which he held from 1997 , in 2001, after controversies over the  construction of the new Wembley Stadium and the National Lottery .
Revised:  He was sacked from his post ( which he held from 1997 , in 2001, after controversies over the construction of the new Wembley Stadium and the National Lottery .
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Original:  He was sacked from his post , which he held from 1997 , in 2001, after controversies over the  construction of the new Wembley Stadium and the National Lottery .
Revised:  He was sacked from his post , which he held since 1997 , in 2001, after controversies over the construction of the new Wembley Stadium and the National Lottery .
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Original:  He was sacked from his post , which he held from 1997 , in 2001, after controversies over the  construction of the new Wembley Stadium and the National Lottery .
Revised:  He was sacked from his post , which he held from 1997 ) in 2001, after controversies over the construction of the new Wembley Stadium and the National Lottery .
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Original:  He was sacked from his post , which he held from 1997 , in 2001, after controversies over the  construction of the new Wembley Stadium and the National Lottery .
Revised:  He was sacked from his post , which he held from 1997 , in 2001, after controversies over the construction of the new Wembley Stadium .
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Original: The former cabinet minister decided to go public after the the former South African President Nelson Mandela announced his son Makgatho Mandela, had died of AIDS.
Revised: The former cabinet minister decided to go public after the former South African President Nelson Mandela announced his son Makgatho Mandela, had died of AIDS.
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Original: Ex-British Culture Minister Chris Smith has lived with the HIV virus for 17 years, he has revealed to the Sunday Times.
Revised: Ex-British Culture Minister has lived with the HIV virus for 17 years, he has revealed to the Sunday Times.
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Original:  The former cabinet minister decided to go public after the former South African President Nelson Mandela announced his son Makgatho Mandela, had died of AIDS.
Revised:  The former cabinet minister decided to go public after the former South African President announced his son Makgatho Mandela, had died of AIDS.
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Original:  Mr Smith was quickly put on a course of anti-retrovirals after he was diagonosed .
Revised:  Mr Smith was quickly put on a course of anti-retrovirals after he was diagnosed .
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Original:  Norquist feels that democrats , along with Republican Jay Boehner, have hijacked the term and made it symbolize corruption and scandel , which he says is entirely unrelated to his project, a branch of Americans for Tax Reform.
Revised:  Norquist feels that Democrats , along with Republican Jay Boehner, have hijacked the term and made it symbolize corruption and scandel , which he says is entirely unrelated to his project, a branch of Americans for Tax Reform.
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Original:  Norquist feels that democrats , along with Republican Jay Boehner, have hijacked the term and made it symbolize corruption and scandel , which he says is entirely unrelated to his project, a branch of Americans for Tax Reform.
Revised:  Norquist feels that democrats , along with Republican Jay Boehner, have hijacked the term and made it symbolize corruption and scandal , which he says is entirely unrelated to his project, a branch of Americans for Tax Reform.
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Original:  We will sue anyone who says it wrong and make lots of money.  
Revised:  We will sue anyone who says it wrong and make lots of money. ” 
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Original: 186,000 cases of chikungunya in Réunion With 186,000 cases of chikungunya in the island of Réunion, that is nearly the quarter of the population of that French overseas département that is officially reffered since Mar. 2005.
Revised:  With 186,000 cases of chikungunya in the island of Réunion, that is nearly the quarter of the population of that French overseas département that is officially reffered since Mar. 2005.
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Original: 186,000 cases of chikungunya in Réunion With 186,000 cases of chikungunya in the island of Réunion, that is nearly the quarter of the population of that French overseas département that is officially reffered since Mar. 2005.
Revised: 186,000 cases of chikungunya in Réunion With 186,000 cases of chikungunya on the island of Réunion, that is nearly the quarter of the population of that French overseas département that is officially reffered since Mar. 2005.
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Original:  The epidemic has particularly got worse those last months, with the worst point of 45,000 new cases in the week from Jan. 30 to Feb. 5.
Revised:  The epidemic has particularly gotten worse these past few months, with the worst point of 45,000 new cases in the week from Jan. 30 to Feb. 5.
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Original:  The Prime Minister Dominique de Villepin has recalled on Wednesday(Mar. 1) that "Nine patients out of 10 were struck since the beginning of the year(...). People couldn't expect the evolution about it."
Revised:  The Prime Minister Dominique de Villepin has stated on Wednesday(Mar. 1) that "Nine patients out of 10 were struck since the beginning of the year(...). People couldn't expect the evolution about it."
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Original: With 186,000 cases of Chikungunya  on the island of Réunion, that is nearly the quarter of the population of that French overseas département that is officially reffered since Mar. 2005.
Revised: With 186,000 cases of Chikungunya on the island of Réunion, nearly one quarter of the population of that French overseas département that is officially reffered since Mar. 2005.
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Original: With 186,000 cases of Chikungunya  on the island of Réunion, that is nearly the quarter of the population of that French overseas département that is officially reffered since Mar. 2005.
Revised: With 186,000 cases of Chikungunya on the island of Réunion, that is nearly the quarter of the population of that French overseas département has officially been affected since Mar. 2005.
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Original:  The epidemic has particularly gotten worse these past few months, with the worst point of 45,000 new cases in the week from Jan. 30 to Feb. 5.
Revised:  The epidemic has gotten markedly worse in the past few months, with the worst point of 45,000 new cases in the week from Jan. 30 to Feb. 5.
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Original:  The epidemic has particularly gotten worse these past few months, with the worst point of 45,000 new cases in the week from Jan. 30 to Feb. 5.
Revised:  The epidemic has particularly gotten worse these past few months, with the worst point being 45,000 new cases in the week from Jan. 30 to Feb. 5.
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Original:  The Prime Minister Dominique de Villepin has stated on Wednesday (Mar. 1) that "Nine out of ten patients were struck since the beginning of the year (...). People couldn't expect the evolution about it."
Revised:  The Prime Minister Dominique de Villepin has stated on Wednesday (Mar. 1) that "Nine out of ten patients were struck since the beginning of the year (...). No one could have anticipated the progression of it."
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Original:  The virus extends also in the Indian Ocean in Seychelles, in Mauritious and especially in Mayotte, where the course of 2000 cases would have been crossed, according to Xavier Bertrand, minister of French Health.
Revised:  The virus is also present in the Indian Ocean in Seychelles, in Mauritious and especially in Mayotte, where the course of 2000 cases would have been crossed, according to Xavier Bertrand, minister of French Health.
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Original:  The virus extends also in the Indian Ocean in Seychelles, in Mauritious and especially in Mayotte, where the course of 2000 cases would have been crossed, according to Xavier Bertrand, minister of French Health.
Revised:  The virus extends also in the Indian Ocean in Seychelles, in Mauritious and especially in Mayotte, where the line of 2000 cases would have been crossed, according to Xavier Bertrand, minister of French Health.
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Original:  That representated doubling in 10 days.
Revised:  That represents a doubling in 10 days.
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Original:  According to Philippe Renault, medical epidemiologist of the CIRE ( Cellule Inter-Régionale d’Epidémiologie ), the proragation of the epidemics will show the first signs of stabilization, on a very high level.
Revised:  According to Philippe Renault, medical epidemiologist of the CIRE ( Cellule Inter-Régionale d’Epidémiologie ), the propagation of the epidemic will show the first signs of stabilization, on a very high level.
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Original:  According to Philippe Renault, medical epidemiologist of the CIRE ( Cellule Inter-Régionale d’Epidémiologie ), the proragation of the epidemics will show the first signs of stabilization, on a very high level.
Revised:  According to Philippe Renault, medical epidemiologist of the CIRE ( Cellule Inter-Régionale d’Epidémiologie ), the proragation of the epidemics will show the first signs of stabilization, at a very high level.
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Original:  He keeps, however, not to draw hasty conclusions: " A infective desease can reach a stable ohasee then to start again.
Revised:  He urged against drawing hasty conclusions, however. " A infective desease can reach a stable ohasee then to start again.
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Original:  He keeps, however, not to draw hasty conclusions: " A infective desease can reach a stable ohasee then to start again.
Revised:  He keeps, however, not to draw hasty conclusions: " An infectious disease can reach a stable ohasee then to start again.
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Original:  He keeps, however, not to draw hasty conclusions: " A infective desease can reach a stable ohasee then to start again.
Revised:  He keeps, however, not to draw hasty conclusions: " A infective desease can reach a plateau, then start again.
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Original:  It will need to be waited until the decrease is honest on all the indicators.
Revised:  It is necessary to wait until the decrease is honest on all the indicators.
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Original:  It will need to be waited until the decrease is honest on all the indicators.
Revised:  It will need to be waited until the decrease is clear on all the indicators.
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Original:  Most of the passengers are reported to be in their twenties.
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Original:  ABC News also reports that police have not found a bomb on the plane, but that passengers were still being questioned.
Revised:  REUTERS also reports that police have not found a bomb on the plane, but that passengers were still being questioned.
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Original: According to the  Department of Transport in the United Kingdom, a Ryanair jetliner flight FR25, carrying 172 pasengers and crew, enroute from Paris , France to Dublin Ireland has been diverted to Prestwick Airport in Scotland following a bomb threat that was recieved by the planes cabin crew.
Revised: According to the UK's Department of Transport in the United Kingdom, a Ryanair jetliner flight FR25, carrying 172 pasengers and crew, enroute from Paris , France to Dublin Ireland has been diverted to Prestwick Airport in Scotland following a bomb threat that was recieved by the planes cabin crew.
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Original: According to the  Department of Transport in the United Kingdom, a Ryanair jetliner flight FR25, carrying 172 pasengers and crew, enroute from Paris , France to Dublin Ireland has been diverted to Prestwick Airport in Scotland following a bomb threat that was recieved by the planes cabin crew.
Revised: According to the Department of Transport , Ryanair flight FR25, carrying 172 pasengers and crew, enroute from Paris , France to Dublin Ireland has been diverted to Prestwick Airport in Scotland following a bomb threat that was recieved by the planes cabin crew.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: According to the  Department of Transport in the United Kingdom, a Ryanair jetliner flight FR25, carrying 172 pasengers and crew, enroute from Paris , France to Dublin Ireland has been diverted to Prestwick Airport in Scotland following a bomb threat that was recieved by the planes cabin crew.
Revised: According to the Department of Transport in the United Kingdom, a Ryanair jetliner flight FR25, carrying 172 pasengers and crew, en-route from Paris to Dublin was diverted to Prestwick Airport in Scotland following a bomb threat that was recieved by the planes cabin crew.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: According to the  Department of Transport in the United Kingdom, a Ryanair jetliner flight FR25, carrying 172 pasengers and crew, enroute from Paris , France to Dublin Ireland has been diverted to Prestwick Airport in Scotland following a bomb threat that was recieved by the planes cabin crew.
Revised: According to the Department of Transport in the United Kingdom, a Ryanair jetliner flight FR25, carrying 172 pasengers and crew, enroute from Paris , France to Dublin Ireland has been diverted to Prestwick Airport in Scotland following a bomb threat that was discovered by the plane's cabin crew.
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Original:  The threat, written as a note, was found under a seat on the plane and the Times Online in the United Kingdom and REUTERS, is now reporting that the threat was a hoax.
Revised:  The threat, a written note, was found under a seat on the plane and the Times Online in the United Kingdom and REUTERS, is now reporting that the threat was a hoax.
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Original:  The threat, written as a note, was found under a seat on the plane and the Times Online in the United Kingdom and REUTERS, is now reporting that the threat was a hoax.
Revised:  The threat, written as a note, was found under a seat on the plane and the Times Online in the United Kingdom and REUTERS, are now reporting that the threat was a hoax.
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Original:  Several other flights were not allowed to leave the airport and  arriving flights were diverted to Edinburgh Airport in Scotland.
Revised:  Three other flights were not allowed to leave the airport and arriving flights were diverted to Edinburgh Airport in Scotland.
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Original:  He made a brief (uncredited) appearance many years ago on one episode of the hit television show , In Living Color.
Revised:  He made a brief (uncredited) appearance many years ago on one episode of the hit television show In Living Color.
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Original:  He also had minor roles in the films , Little Nicky, Child's Play, and Man on the Moon, among others
Revised:  He also had minor roles in the films Little Nicky, Child's Play, and Man on the Moon, among others
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Original:  He also had minor roles in the films Little Nicky, Child's Play, and Man on the Moon, among others  
Revised:  He also had minor roles in the films Little Nicky, Child's Play, and Man on the Moon, among others . 
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Original:  A passerby describes seeing , "...a smashed up bicycle covered in  plastic bags and  a yellow raincoat..
Revised:  A passerby describes seeing "...a smashed up bicycle covered in plastic bags and a yellow raincoat..
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Original:  A passerby describes seeing , "...a smashed up bicycle covered in  plastic bags and  a yellow raincoat..
Revised:  A passerby describes seeing , "...a smashed up bicycle covered in ... plastic bags and a yellow raincoat..
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Original:  A passerby describes seeing , "...a smashed up bicycle covered in  plastic bags and  a yellow raincoat..
Revised:  A passerby describes seeing , "...a smashed up bicycle covered in plastic bags and ... a yellow raincoat..
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Original:  Yesterday morning, local media reports indicated that his condition was listed as "critical", but the source close to Mr. Knutsen described his condition yesterday morning as "grave".
Revised:  Yesterday morning, local media reports indicated that his condition was listed as "critical", but a source close to Mr. Knutsen described his condition yesterday morning as "grave".
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Original: Terry Knutsen, a man who achieved some notoriety in the 1960's with the novelty song Curse of the Hearse, was seriously injured in a collision late Wednesday evening, according to sources close to the singer.
Revised: Terry Knutsen, a man who achieved some notoriety in the 1960s with the novelty song Curse of the Hearse, was seriously injured in a collision late Wednesday evening, according to sources close to the singer.
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