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Original:  With about 80,000 spectators in attendance, also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the bank, watching as the Queen's baton made it's way to the Melbourne Cricket Ground .  4,500 athletes representing 71 teams from 53 commonwealth countries will be competing at the games this year.
Revised:  With about 80,000 spectators in attendance, also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the bank, watching as the Queen's baton made it's way to the Melbourne Cricket Ground . 4,500 athletes representing 71 teams from 53 Commonwealth countries will be competing at the games this year.
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Original:  The Commonwealth Games will run through to the 26th March . ADD OVERVIE
Revised:  The Commonwealth Games will run through to the 26th March ADD OVERVIE
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Original:  The Commonwealth Games will run through to the 26th March . ADD OVERVIE
Revised:  The Commonwealth Games will run through to the 26th March . 
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Original: The XVIII Commonwealth Games, were opened officially by Queen Elizabeth II tonight, in Melbourne, Australia in a two-and-a-half hour spectacular ceremony.
Revised: The XVIII Commonwealth Games, were opened officially by Queen Elizabeth II tonight, in Melbourne, Australia in a two-and-a-half hour spectacular 
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Original:  The Opening Ceremony was held at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
Revised:  Opening Ceremony held at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
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Original:  With about 80,000 spectators  in attendance,  also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the bank , watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
Revised:  About 80,000 spectators in attendance, also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the bank , watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
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Original:  With about 80,000 spectators  in attendance,  also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the bank , watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
Revised:  With about 80,000 spectators were in attendance, also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the bank , watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
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Original:  With about 80,000 spectators  in attendance,  also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the bank , watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
Revised:  With about 80,000 spectators in attendance, with some also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the bank , watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
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Original:  With about 80,000 spectators  in attendance,  also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the bank , watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
Revised:  With about 80,000 spectators in attendance, also on the nearby Yarra River Hundreds of thousand lined the riverbank , watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
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Original: The XVIII Commonwealth Games , were opened officially by Queen Elizabeth II tonight, in Melbourne, Australia in a two-and-a-half hour spectacular Opening Ceremony held at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
Revised: The XVIIIth Commonwealth Games were opened officially by Queen Elizabeth II tonight, in Melbourne, Australia in a two-and-a-half hour spectacular Opening Ceremony held at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
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Original:  About 80,000 spectators were in attendance, and hundreds of thousand lined the riverbank of the nearby Yarra River, watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
Revised:  About 80,000 spectators were in attendance, and hundreds of thousands lined the riverbank of the nearby Yarra River, watching as the Queen's baton made its way to the stadium.
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Original:  The Queen's Baton final runner was John Landy, the current Governor of Victoria, and a Bronze medallist in the 1956 Summer Olympics.
Revised:  The Queen's Baton final runner was John Landy, the current Governor of Victoria, and a Bronze medalist in the 1956 Summer Olympics.
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Original:  The ceremony began with the flags of Australia, England, (previous host) and India, (next host) been raised.
Revised:  The ceremony began with the flags of Australia, England, (previous host) and India, (next host) being raised.
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Original:  In a change from the traditional format  the teams did not enter in alphabetical order , insteadthey entered, in order of regions of the Commonwealth . Starting with the European nations , then, Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally , Oceania entered the stadium.
Revised:  In a change from the traditional format , the teams did not enter in alphabetical order , insteadthey entered, in order of regions of the Commonwealth . Starting with the European nations , then, Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally , Oceania entered the stadium.
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Original:  In a change from the traditional format  the teams did not enter in alphabetical order , insteadthey entered, in order of regions of the Commonwealth . Starting with the European nations , then, Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally , Oceania entered the stadium.
Revised:  In a change from the traditional format the teams did not enter in alphabetical order ; instead, they entered in order of regions of the Commonwealth . Starting with the European nations , then, Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally , Oceania entered the stadium.
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Original:  In a change from the traditional format  the teams did not enter in alphabetical order , insteadthey entered, in order of regions of the Commonwealth . Starting with the European nations , then, Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally , Oceania entered the stadium.
Revised:  In a change from the traditional format the teams did not enter in alphabetical order , insteadthey entered, in order of regions of the Commonwealth , starting with the European nations , then, Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally , Oceania entered the stadium.
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Original:  In a change from the traditional format  the teams did not enter in alphabetical order , insteadthey entered, in order of regions of the Commonwealth . Starting with the European nations , then, Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally , Oceania entered the stadium.
Revised:  In a change from the traditional format the teams did not enter in alphabetical order , insteadthey entered, in order of regions of the Commonwealth . Starting with the European nations . Then Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally , Oceania entered the stadium.
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Original:  In a change from the traditional format  the teams did not enter in alphabetical order , insteadthey entered, in order of regions of the Commonwealth . Starting with the European nations , then, Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally , Oceania entered the stadium.
Revised:  In a change from the traditional format the teams did not enter in alphabetical order , insteadthey entered, in order of regions of the Commonwealth . Starting with the European nations , then, Africa, Asia, the Americas, the Caribbean and finally Oceania entered the stadium.
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Original:  The Queen, dressed in gold and accompanied by the Duke of Edinburgh, received the baton, which has travelled to all 71 competing nations, where she read the message place within the baton (366 days earlier on Commonwealth Day, March 14, 2005)  The Queen's said "I am glad to have this opportunity to offer my best wishes to every athlete and official taking part in these friendly Games ...
Revised:  The Queen, dressed in gold and accompanied by the Duke of Edinburgh, received the baton, which has travelled to all 71 competing nations, where she read the message placed within the baton (366 days earlier on Commonwealth Day, March 14, 2005) The Queen's said "I am glad to have this opportunity to offer my best wishes to every athlete and official taking part in these friendly Games ...
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Original:  The Queen, dressed in gold and accompanied by the Duke of Edinburgh, received the baton, which has travelled to all 71 competing nations, where she read the message place within the baton (366 days earlier on Commonwealth Day, March 14, 2005)  The Queen's said "I am glad to have this opportunity to offer my best wishes to every athlete and official taking part in these friendly Games ...
Revised:  The Queen, dressed in gold and accompanied by the Duke of Edinburgh, received the baton, which has travelled to all 71 competing nations, where she read the message place within the baton (366 days earlier on Commonwealth Day, March 14, 2005) . The Queen's said "I am glad to have this opportunity to offer my best wishes to every athlete and official taking part in these friendly Games ...
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Original:   It now gives me the greatest pleasure to declare the 18th Commonwealth Games open." 4,500 athletes representing 71 teams from 53 Commonwealth countries will be competing at the games this year.
Revised:  . It now gives me the greatest pleasure to declare the 18th Commonwealth Games open." 4,500 athletes representing 71 teams from 53 Commonwealth countries will be competing at the games this year.
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Original:  A potential global television audience of 1.5 billion is expected to turn in.
Revised:  A potential global television audience of 1.5 billion is expected to tune in.
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Original: A car bomb has exploded in northern Paris  killing at least 1 person.
Revised: A car bomb has exploded in northern Paris , killing at least 1 person.
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Original:  The car exploded on a main road near the suburb of La Courneuve . fr:EN cours : Une voiture a explosé à Par
Revised:  The car exploded on a main road near the suburb of La Courneuve fr:EN cours : Une voiture a explosé à Par
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Original:  The car exploded on a main road near the suburb of La Courneuve . fr:EN cours : Une voiture a explosé à Par
Revised:  The car exploded on a main road near the suburb of La Courneuve . 
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Original: A car bomb has exploded in northern Paris, killing at least 1 person.
Revised: A car bomb exploded in northern Paris, killing at least 1 person.
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Original:  The french   fire brigade received a call just before 10:00AM GMT to put out a fire on a car.
Revised:  The french fire brigade received the call just before 10:00AM GMT to put out a fire on a car.
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Original:  A criminal act is suspected — terrorism has been ruled out , although murder by planting a bomb in a victim's car is said to be unusual in France.
Revised:  A criminal act is suspected — terrorism has been discounted , although murder by planting a bomb in a victim's car is said to be unusual in France.
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Original:  A editorial claims that to the detriment of Gingrich, "Santorum has set himself up to be the new conservative alternative to Romney."
Revised:  An editorial in claims that to the detriment of Gingrich, "Santorum has set himself up to be the new conservative alternative to Romney."
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Original:  Though the races were non-binding, they reveal a vulnerability for front-runner Mitt Romney, and a possible revitalization of the Santorum campaign .
Revised:  Though the races were non-binding, they reveal a vulnerability for front-runner Mitt Romney, and a possible revitalization of the .
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Original:  According to , this consolidated conservatives split between Santorum and Gingrich in their opposition to Romney.
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Original:  An editorial in claims that to the detriment of Gingrich, "Santorum has set himself up to be the new conservative alternative to Romney."
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Original:  Though the races were non-binding, they reveal a vulnerability for front-runner Mitt Romney, and a possible revitalization of the .
Revised:  Though the races were non-binding, some analysts see in them a vulnerability for front-runner Mitt Romney, and a possible revitalization of the .
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Original:  As he did not file for the Missouri primary, former House speaker Newt Gingrich was not on the ballot.
Revised:  Former House speaker Newt Gingrich was not on the ballot.
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Original: Shinzo Abe, the Chief Cabinet Secretary of Japan, called attention to computer viruses which are infected through Winny, a Japanese peer-to-peer (P2P) file-sharing program, and appealed to stop using Winny.
Revised: Shinzo Abe, the Chief Cabinet Secretary of Japan, called attention to computer viruses which propogate via Winny, a Japanese peer-to-peer (P2P) file-sharing program, and appealed to stop using Winny.
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Original:  The viruses ( known as Antiny  or Kintama(testicle)-virus) upload documents to the Winny network without users' intention and are regarded as a serious problem because of many  information leakages.
Revised:  The viruses ( known as Antiny ( or Kintama(testicle)-virus) upload documents to the Winny network without users' intention and are regarded as a serious problem because of many information leakages.
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Original:  The viruses ( known as Antiny  or Kintama(testicle)-virus) upload documents to the Winny network without users' intention and are regarded as a serious problem because of many  information leakages.
Revised:  The viruses ( known as Antiny or Kintama(testicle)-virus) uploads documents to the Winny network without users' intention and are regarded as a serious problem because of many information leakages.
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Original:  The viruses ( known as Antiny  or Kintama(testicle)-virus) upload documents to the Winny network without users' intention and are regarded as a serious problem because of many  information leakages.
Revised:  The viruses ( known as Antiny or Kintama(testicle)-virus) upload documents to the Winny network without first receiving permission from the user. They are regarded as a serious problem because of many information leakages.
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Original:  The viruses ( known as Antiny  or Kintama(testicle)-virus) upload documents to the Winny network without users' intention and are regarded as a serious problem because of many  information leakages.
Revised:  The viruses ( known as Antiny or Kintama(testicle)-virus) upload documents to the Winny network without users' intention and are regarded as a serious problem because of many unintentional information leakages.
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Original:  The Chief Cabinet Secretary stated in the press interview: "Without each people's counter measures, information leakages cannot be prevented.
Revised:  The Chief Cabinet Secretary stated in a press interview, "Without each people's counter measures, information leakages cannot be prevented.
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Original: Shinzo Abe, the Chief Cabinet Secretary of Japan, called attention to computer viruses which propogate via Winny, a Japanese peer-to-peer (P2P) file-sharing network .
Revised: Japan's Chief Cabinet Secretary of Japan, called attention to computer viruses which propogate via Winny, a Japanese peer-to-peer (P2P) file-sharing network .
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Original: Shinzo Abe, the Chief Cabinet Secretary of Japan, called attention to computer viruses which propogate via Winny, a Japanese peer-to-peer (P2P) file-sharing network .
Revised: Shinzo Abe, the Chief Cabinet Secretary , Shinzo Abe, has advised against using the Winny peer-to-peer (P2P) file-sharing network .
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Original:  One virus known as Antiny (or Kintama (testicle)-virus ) uploads documents to the Winny network without first receiving permission from the user .
Revised:  One virus , Antiny (or Kintama (testicle)-virus ) uploads documents to the Winny network without first receiving permission from the user .
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Original:  One virus known as Antiny (or Kintama (testicle)-virus ) uploads documents to the Winny network without first receiving permission from the user .
Revised:  One virus known as Antiny (or Kintama (testicle)-virus is believed responsible for uploading documents to the Winny network without first receiving permission from the user .
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Original:  One virus known as Antiny (or Kintama (testicle)-virus ) uploads documents to the Winny network without first receiving permission from the user .
Revised:  One virus known as Antiny (or Kintama (testicle)-virus ) uploads documents to the filesharing network without first receiving permission from the user .
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Original:  One virus, Antiny (or Kintama (testicle)  -virus is believed responsible for uploading documents to the filesharing network without first obtaining user permission.
Revised:  One virus, Antiny (or Kintama (testicle) ) -virus is believed responsible for uploading documents to the filesharing network without first obtaining user permission.
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Original: The Chief Cabinet Secretary stated in a press interview, " Without each people's counter measures, information leakages cannot be prevented.
Revised: The Chief Cabinet Secretary stated in a press interview, " Unless each one bewares and takes counter measures, information leakages cannot be prevented.
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Original:  The most reliable measure is not to use Winny.
Revised:  The most secure measure is not to use Winny.
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Original: The Chief Cabinet Secretary stated in a press interview, "Unless each one bewares and takes counter measures, information leakages cannot be prevented.
Revised: The Chief Cabinet Secretary stated in a press interview, "Unless each one bewares and takes counter measures, information leaks cannot be prevented.
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Original: Shin Corporation, the multi-billion baht telecom and IT giant  has lost its defamation suit against Supinya Klangnarong for her comments in an interview with the Thai Post in July 2003.
Revised: Shin Corporation, the multi-billion baht telecom and IT giant , has lost its defamation suit against Supinya Klangnarong for her comments in an interview with the Thai Post in July 2003.
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Original:  This judgement comes at an inopportune moment for the Prime Minister , his family's recent tax-free sale of their stake in Shin has acted as a catalyst for the protests calling for Thaksin to resign.
Revised:  This judgement comes at an inopportune moment for the Prime Minister : his family's recent tax-free sale of their stake in Shin has acted as a catalyst for the protests calling for Thaksin to resign.
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Original: 180px|Opium seized in Afghanistan In spite of the U.S. Government's Five-Pillar Counternarcotics Plan for combating narcotics in Afghanistan, approximately 140,000 hectares of poppies were planted in Afghanistan this year, according to the Associated Press.
Revised: 180px|Opium seized in Afghanistan In spite of the U.S. Government's "five pillar counternarcotics strategy" for combating narcotics in Afghanistan, approximately 140,000 hectares of poppies were planted in Afghanistan this year, according to the Associated Press.
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Original:  The USA's 5 pillar strategy includes public information, alternative livelihoods, eradication, interdiction, and law enforcement/justice reform.
Revised:  The USA's "five pillar strategy" includes public information, alternative livelihoods, eradication, interdiction, and law enforcement/justice reform.
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Original:   Australian Republican Movement national director, Allison Henry said Mr Howard has provided some recognition for a possible Australian head of state.
Revised:  Australian Republican Movement said Mr Howard has provided some recognition for a possible Australian head of state.
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Original:  "Mr Howard is an astute reader of the mood of the Australian people, and this change in language, if not in sentiment, is clearly some recognition of the likelihood of a future Australian head of state . " 
Revised:  "Mr Howard is an astute reader of the mood of the Australian people, and this change in language, if not in sentiment, is clearly some recognition of the likelihood of a future Australian head of state , " 
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Original: Australian Prime Minister John Howard has given his strongest indication yet that Australians may choose to change their head of state beyond Queen Elizebeth II's reign.
Revised: Australian Prime Minister John Howard has given his strongest indication yet that Australians may choose to change their head of state beyond Queen Elizabeth II's reign.
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Original:  "I do not believe this country would become a republic while the Queen is on the throne , beyond that I don't know  " Mr Howard told  BBC.
Revised:  "I do not believe this country would become a republic while the Queen is on the throne ; beyond that I don't know " Mr Howard told BBC.
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Original:  "I do not believe this country would become a republic while the Queen is on the throne , beyond that I don't know  " Mr Howard told  BBC.
Revised:  "I do not believe this country would become a republic while the Queen is on the throne , beyond that I don't know , " Mr Howard told BBC.
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Original:  "I do not believe this country would become a republic while the Queen is on the throne , beyond that I don't know  " Mr Howard told  BBC.
Revised:  "I do not believe this country would become a republic while the Queen is on the throne , beyond that I don't know " Mr Howard told the BBC.
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Original:  In a seperate interview with British broadcaster , ITV, Mr Howard refused to predict whether he thought Prince Charles would become King of Australia and indicated that it would be for the Australian people to decide.
Revised:  In a separate interview with British broadcaster , ITV, Mr Howard refused to predict whether he thought Prince Charles would become King of Australia and indicated that it would be for the Australian people to decide.
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Original:  In a seperate interview with British broadcaster , ITV, Mr Howard refused to predict whether he thought Prince Charles would become King of Australia and indicated that it would be for the Australian people to decide.
Revised:  In a seperate interview with British broadcaster ITV, Mr Howard refused to predict whether he thought Prince Charles would become King of Australia and indicated that it would be for the Australian people to decide.
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Original:  "Well, that is a matter for the Australian people, and I believe in democracy  " he said.
Revised:  "Well, that is a matter for the Australian people, and I believe in democracy , " he said.
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Original:  Mr Abbott told ABC that he believes the person on the throne is irrelevant , it is the institution that Australians admire.
Revised:  Mr Abbott told ABC that he believes the person on the throne is irrelevant : it is the institution that Australians admire.
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Original:  The comments are the first from Mr Howard, a proud monarchist  casting doubt over the future of the monarchy in Australia.
Revised:  The comments are the first from Mr Howard, a proud monarchist , casting doubt over the future of the monarchy in Australia.
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Original:   A statue by Robert Berks will be unveiled April 18, 50th year of Einstein's death, at Princeton, New Jersey, his home for the last 22 years of his life.
Revised:  April 18 -- A statue by Robert Berks will be unveiled April 18, 50th year of Einstein's death, at Princeton, New Jersey, his home for the last 22 years of his life.
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Original:   A statue by Robert Berks will be unveiled April 18, 50th year of Einstein's death, at Princeton, New Jersey, his home for the last 22 years of his life.
Revised:  A statue by Robert Berks will be unveiled at Princeton, New Jersey, his home for the last 22 years of his life.
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