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Original:  The (PAF) said Flight Officer Mukhtiar and male colleague Squadron Leader Saqib Abbasi faced a "serious in-flight emergency" while training in an fighter.
Revised:  The (PAF) said Flying Officer Mukhtiar and male colleague Squadron Leader Saqib Abbasi faced a "serious in-flight emergency" while training in an fighter.
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Original:  The statement from the organization, posted on internet forums, came hours after U.S. officials announced bin Laden had been planning an attack on the U.S. rail network on the tenth anniversary of the this year before he was killed by commandos last weekend.
Revised:  The statement from the organization, posted on internet forums, came hours after U.S. officials announced bin Laden had been planning an attack on the American rail network on the tenth anniversary of the this year before he was killed by commandos last weekend.
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Original:  The terrorist group also confirmed they were planning to release a tape recorded by bin Laden before his death, which will contain "congratulations and advice ". U.S. secretary of state Hillary Clinton insisted tension between Washington and Pakistan over the raid had been exaggerated, and said she was keen to keep relations with Islamabad.
Revised:  The terrorist group also confirmed they were planning to release a tape recorded by bin Laden before his death, which will contain "congratulations and advice ." U.S. secretary of state Hillary Clinton insisted tension between Washington and Pakistan over the raid had been exaggerated, and said she was keen to keep relations with Islamabad.
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Original:  The terrorist group also confirmed they were planning to release a tape recorded by bin Laden before his death, which will contain "congratulations and advice ". U.S. secretary of state Hillary Clinton insisted tension between Washington and Pakistan over the raid had been exaggerated, and said she was keen to keep relations with Islamabad.
Revised:  The terrorist group also confirmed they were planning to release a tape recorded by bin Laden before his death, which will contain "congratulations and advice ". U.S. Secretary of State Hillary Clinton insisted tension between Washington and Pakistan over the raid had been exaggerated, and said she was keen to keep relations with Islamabad.
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Original:  The statement from the organization, posted on internet forums, came hours after U. S. officials announced bin Laden  had been planning an attack on the American rail network on the tenth anniversary of the September 11 attacks this year before he was killed by commandos last weekend.
Revised:  The statement from the organization, posted on internet forums, came hours after U. S. officials announced bin Laden had been planning an attack on the American rail network on the tenth anniversary of the September 11 attacks this year 
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Original:  Knowledge of the planned rail sabotage was gleaned from computer equipment seized by U.S. special forces after they shot the al-Qaeda leader dead during a raid in , Pakistan.
Revised:  . U.S. special forces after they shot the al-Qaeda leader dead during a raid in , Pakistan.
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Original:  The revelation that al-Qaeda was planning more attacks against the U.S. comes only several days after officials in Washington, D.C. warned the terrorist group was likely to be plotting a revenge attack to avenge the death of bin Laden.
Revised:  The revelation that al-Qaeda was planning more attacks against the U.S. comes only several days after officials warned the terrorist group was likely to be plotting a revenge attack to avenge the death of bin Laden.
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Original:  The terrorist group also confirmed they were planning to release a tape recorded by bin Laden before his death, which will contain "congratulations and advice."
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Original:  ]] Al-Qaeda has said it would continue to launch more terrorist attacks on the U.S. and warned the death of their leader Osama bin Laden, would "not be wasted".
Revised:  ]] Al-Qaeda has said it will continue to launch more terrorist attacks on the U.S. and warned the death of their leader Osama bin Laden, would "not be wasted".
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Original:  Polling booths in the . Polls taken prior to the election implied that AV would be rejected by some margin, but due to low turnout - despite the nice weather - the results are likely to be unpredictable.
Revised:  Polling booths in the . Polls taken prior to the election implied that AV would be rejected by some margin, but due to low turnout - despite good weather - the results are likely to be unpredictable.
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Original:  Polling booths in the . Polls taken prior to the election implied that AV would be rejected by some margin, but due to low turnout - despite good weather - the results are likely to be unpredictable.
Revised:  Polling booths in the . Polls taken prior to the election implied that AV would be rejected by some margin, but due to low turnout — despite good weather - the results are likely to be unpredictable.
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Original:  Polling booths in the . Polls taken prior to the election implied that AV would be rejected by some margin, but due to low turnout - despite good weather - the results are likely to be unpredictable.
Revised:  Polling booths in the . Polls taken prior to the election implied that AV would be rejected by some margin, but due to low turnout - despite good weather — the results are likely to be unpredictable.
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Original:  The United Kingdom electorate took to the polls today to vote in both local elections and a UK-wide referendum regarding the system used to elect its members of parliament to the .
Revised:  The United Kingdom electorate took to the polls yesterday to vote in both local elections and a UK-wide referendum regarding the system used to elect its members of parliament to the .
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Original:  It was ultimately replaced by a larger, faster vessel and was sold to who used it until 2004 to ply New Zealand's seas, connecting to and t 
Revised:  It was ultimately replaced by a larger, faster vessel and was sold to who used it until 2004 to ply New Zealand's seas, connecting to and to . 
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Original:  All were rescued.
Revised:  Local media report all were rescued.
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Original:  Police , the , local tug boats, and volunteer rescuers all attended the accident.
Revised:  Local reports indicated police , the , local tug boats, and volunteer rescuers all attended the accident.
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Original:  The converted ferry  began to list on entering the harbour.
Revised:  The converted ferry reportedly began to list on entering the harbour.
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Original: Built in  1974 in Norway the ship served with Scottish ferry firm until 1995, connecting the mainland town of to on the .
Revised: Built in 1974 , the ship served with Scottish ferry firm until 1995, connecting the mainland town of to on the .
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Original:  Despite a drop in violence in the country during the past weekend, the  police reported 284 vehicles being torched in petrol bomb attacks on  the 18th consecutive night of the riots.
Revised:  Despite a drop in violence in the country during the past weekend, the The police reported 284 vehicles being torched in petrol bomb attacks on the 18th consecutive night of the riots.
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Original:   President Jacques Chirac, who has been criticized for keeping a low profile during the crisis, prepared to address the nation on Monday  in a television broadcast   
Revised:  Chirac, who has been criticized for keeping a low profile during the crisis, prepared to address the nation on Monday in a television broadcast 
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Original:   Bursten said Ludwig was found with the missing girl, 14-year-old , Kara Beth Borden, a daughter of the slain couple, and  she was unharmed.
Revised:  Bursten said Ludwig was found with the missing girl, 14-year-old Kara Beth Borden, a daughter of the slain couple, and she was unharmed.
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Original:   Bursten said Ludwig was found with the missing girl, 14-year-old , Kara Beth Borden, a daughter of the slain couple, and  she was unharmed.
Revised:  Bursten said Ludwig was found with the missing girl, 14-year-old , Kara Beth Borden, a daughter of the slain couple, and that she was unharmed.
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Original: Long Island Rail Road (LIRR) service was suspended at Pennsylvania Station due to a smoke condition that originated in the station ceiling .
Revised: Long Island Rail Road (LIRR) service was suspended at Pennsylvania Station due to a smoke condition . The fire was in the station ceiling .
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Original:  Smoke continued to fill the 7th Ave. entrance  as late as 8:10 PM, well after FDNY had the situation under control.
Revised:  Smoke continued to fill the 7th Ave. entrance with smoke as late as 8:10 PM, well after FDNY had the situation under control.
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Original:  TV crews and passers-by captured footage and cellphone snapshots of the scene, while confused commuters were moved along to the tune of "Keep movin'" by National Guardsmen and MTA  Police.
Revised:  TV crews captured footage and cellphone snapshots of the scene, while confused commuters were moved along to the tune of "Keep movin'" by National Guardsmen and MTA Police.
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Original:  TV crews and passers-by captured footage and cellphone snapshots of the scene, while confused commuters were moved along to the tune of "Keep movin'" by National Guardsmen and MTA  Police.
Revised:  TV crews and passers-by captured footage and passers-by snapped cellphone images of the scene, while confused commuters were moved along to the tune of "Keep movin'" by National Guardsmen and MTA Police.
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Original:  TV crews captured footage and passers-by snapped cellphone images of the scene, while confused commuters were moved along to the tune of "Keep movin'" by National Guardsmen and MTA w:Metropolitan Transportation Authority (New York) Police.
Revised:  TV crews captured footage and passers-by snapped cellphone images of the scene, while confused commuters were moved along to the tune of "Keep movin'" by National Guardsmen and MTA Police.
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Original: "I can confirm that all the passengers were killed when the plane exploded as it crashed into the sea," local radio station was told by a navy official  .
Revised: "I can confirm that all the passengers were killed when the plane exploded as it crashed into the sea," a navy official .
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Original:  Officials say that fifteen bodies have been recovered and the ten others on board have sunk with the wreckage.
Revised:  Officials say that fifteen bodies have been recovered and it is thought the others on board have sunk with the wreckage.
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Original: "I can confirm that all the passengers were killed when the plane exploded as it crashed into the sea," a navy official told to local radio station .
Revised: "I can confirm that all the passengers were killed when the plane exploded as it crashed into the sea," a navy official told local radio station .
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Original: Airline has not confirmed passenger numbers.
Revised:  has not confirmed passenger numbers.
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Original: "I can confirm that all the passengers were killed when the plane exploded as it crashed into the sea," a navy official told local radio station .
Revised: "I can confirm that all the passengers were killed when the plane exploded as it crashed into the sea," an official told local radio station .
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Original: Australian PM Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of a 292 million dollar bilateral agreement with Malaysian PM Dato Sri Najib Tun Razak to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat , away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
Revised: Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of a 292 million dollar bilateral agreement with Malaysian PM Dato Sri Najib Tun Razak to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat , away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
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Original: Australian PM Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of a 292 million dollar bilateral agreement with Malaysian PM Dato Sri Najib Tun Razak to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat , away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
Revised: Australian PM Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of an 292 million dollar bilateral agreement with Malaysian PM Dato Sri Najib Tun Razak to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat , away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
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Original: Australian PM Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of a 292 million dollar bilateral agreement with Malaysian PM Dato Sri Najib Tun Razak to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat , away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
Revised: Australian PM Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of a 292 million bilateral agreement with Malaysian PM Dato Sri Najib Tun Razak to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat , away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
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Original: Australian PM Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of a 292 million dollar bilateral agreement with Malaysian PM Dato Sri Najib Tun Razak to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat , away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
Revised: Australian PM Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of a 292 million dollar bilateral agreement with Malaysian counterpart to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat , away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
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Original: Australian PM Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of a 292 million dollar bilateral agreement with Malaysian PM Dato Sri Najib Tun Razak to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat , away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
Revised: Australian PM Julia Gillard is undergoing the final stages of a 292 million dollar bilateral agreement with Malaysian PM Dato Sri Najib Tun Razak to relocate 800 asylum seekers who arrive illegally by boat away from the Australian mainland for detention and processing.
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Original:  In exchange Gillard will expand Australia’s humanitarian efforts by assisting in the resettling of 4000 persons of genuine refugee status, currently living in Malaysia, over a period of 4 years.
Revised:  In exchange Gillard will expand Australia’s humanitarian efforts by assisting in the resettling of 4,000 persons of genuine refugee status, currently living in Malaysia, over a period of 4 years.
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Original:  This bilateral agreement by the Gillard Government stems from a meeting held by both the Australian and Malaysian leaders on March 30th at a Regional Co-Operation themed Ministerial Conference in Bali , Indonesia.
Revised:  This move by the Gillard Government stems from a meeting held by both the Australian and Malaysian leaders on March 30th at a Regional Co-Operation themed Ministerial Conference in Bali , Indonesia.
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Original:  This bilateral agreement by the Gillard Government stems from a meeting held by both the Australian and Malaysian leaders on March 30th at a Regional Co-Operation themed Ministerial Conference in Bali , Indonesia.
Revised:  This bilateral agreement by the Gillard Government stems from a meeting held by both the Australian and Malaysian leaders on March 30 at a Regional Co-Operation themed Ministerial Conference in Bali , Indonesia.
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Original:  This bilateral agreement by the Gillard Government stems from a meeting held by both the Australian and Malaysian leaders on March 30th at a Regional Co-Operation themed Ministerial Conference in Bali , Indonesia.
Revised:  This bilateral agreement by the Gillard Government stems from a meeting held by both the Australian and Malaysian leaders on March 30th at a Regional Co-Operation-themed Ministerial Conference in Bali , Indonesia.
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Original:  This bilateral agreement by the Gillard Government stems from a meeting held by both the Australian and Malaysian leaders on March 30th at a Regional Co-Operation themed Ministerial Conference in Bali , Indonesia.
Revised:  This bilateral agreement by the Gillard Government stems from a meeting held by both the Australian and Malaysian leaders on March 30th at a Regional Co-Operation themed Ministerial Conference in , Indonesia.
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Original:  Gillard had previously tried  to pitch the relocation of asylum seekers to countries like East Timor and Papua New Guinea unsuccessfully .
Revised:  Gillard had previously tried unsuccessfully to pitch the relocation of asylum seekers to countries like East Timor and Papua New Guinea unsuccessfully .
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Original:  Gillard had previously tried  to pitch the relocation of asylum seekers to countries like East Timor and Papua New Guinea unsuccessfully .
Revised:  Gillard had previously tried to pitch the relocation of asylum seekers to countries like East Timor and Papua New Guinea .
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Original:  Immigration Minister Chris Bowen noted that this agreement may be controversial but, " As  the Prime Minister said, nobody should doubt our resolve to break the people smugglers' business model."
Revised:  Immigration Minister noted that this agreement may be controversial but, " As the Prime Minister said, nobody should doubt our resolve to break the people smugglers' business model."
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Original:  Immigration Minister Chris Bowen noted that this agreement may be controversial but, " As  the Prime Minister said, nobody should doubt our resolve to break the people smugglers' business model."
Revised:  Immigration Minister Chris Bowen noted that this agreement may be controversial but, " a the Prime Minister said, nobody should doubt our resolve to break the people smugglers' business model."
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Original:  Immigration Minister Chris Bowen noted that this agreement may be controversial but, " As  the Prime Minister said, nobody should doubt our resolve to break the people smugglers' business model."
Revised:  Immigration Minister Chris Bowen noted that this agreement may be controversial but, " As s the Prime Minister said, nobody should doubt our resolve to break the people smugglers' business model."
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Original:  Opposition leader Tony Abbott says that this agreement harkens back to the original Howard Government migration policy which began in 2001 and was eventually scrapped by the Rudd Labour Government in 2007.
Revised:  Opposition leader Tony Abbott says that this agreement harkens back to the original migration policy which began in 2001 and was eventually scrapped by the Rudd Labour Government in 2007.
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Original:  Opposition leader Tony Abbott says that this agreement harkens back to the original Howard Government migration policy which began in 2001 and was eventually scrapped by the Rudd Labour Government in 2007.
Revised:  Opposition leader Tony Abbott says that this agreement harkens back to the original Howard Government migration policy which began in 2001 and was eventually scrapped by the Government in 2007.
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Original:  This was known as the ‘Pacific Solution’ and aimed to relocate asylum seekers who illegally arrived into Australia by relocating and processing them in detention centres in Pacific Islands ie: Christmas Island, Nauru .
Revised:  This was known as the ' and aimed to relocate asylum seekers who illegally arrived into Australia by relocating and processing them in detention centres in Pacific Islands ie: Christmas Island, Nauru .
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Original:  This was known as the ‘Pacific Solution’ and aimed to relocate asylum seekers who illegally arrived into Australia by relocating and processing them in detention centres in Pacific Islands ie: Christmas Island, Nauru .
Revised:  This was known as the ‘Pacific Solution’ and aimed to relocate asylum seekers who illegally arrived in Australia by relocating and processing them in detention centres in Pacific Islands ie: Christmas Island, Nauru .
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Original:  The official website of the UN Refugee Agency notes that while Malaysia hosts an estimated 3 million refugees and migrants from various countries it is not a signatory to the UN Refugee Convention (1951) .
Revised:  The 's website notes that while Malaysia hosts an estimated 3 million refugees and migrants from various countries it is not a signatory to the UN Refugee Convention (1951) .
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Original:  The official website of the UN Refugee Agency notes that while Malaysia hosts an estimated 3 million refugees and migrants from various countries it is not a signatory to the UN Refugee Convention (1951) .
Revised:  The official website of the UN Refugee Agency notes that while Malaysia hosts an estimated three million refugees and migrants from various countries it is not a signatory to the UN Refugee Convention (1951) .
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Original:  The official website of the UN Refugee Agency notes that while Malaysia hosts an estimated 3 million refugees and migrants from various countries it is not a signatory to the UN Refugee Convention (1951) .
Revised:  The official website of the UN Refugee Agency notes that while Malaysia hosts an estimated 3 million refugees and migrants from various countries it is not a signatory to the .
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Original:  Gillard had previously tried unsuccessfully to pitch the relocation of asylum seekers to countries like East Timor and  Papua New Guinea  .
Revised:  Gillard had previously tried unsuccessfully to pitch the relocation of asylum seekers to East Timor and Papua New Guinea .
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Original:  This was known as the ' and aimed to relocate asylum seekers who illegally arrived in Australia by relocating and processing them in detention centres in the of and .
Revised:  This was known as the '' and aimed to relocate asylum seekers who illegally arrived in Australia by relocating and processing them in detention centres in the of and .
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Original:  This, it believes, will complicate the status determination of refugees and may make refugees vulnerable to arrest and unrelated deportations
Revised:  This, it believes, will complicate the status determination of refugees 
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Original:  Vladimir Putin denies Russian jet was in Turkish airspace During the rescue attempt for Captain Murakhtin, a helicopter was forced to land after being shot at by rebel fighters.
Revised:  During the rescue attempt for Captain Murakhtin, a helicopter was forced to land after being shot at by rebel fighters.
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Original:  A Russian named as Alexander Pozynich died during the attack.
Revised:  Russian Alexander Pozynich died during the attack.
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Original:  Russia's President has said Pozynich and Murakhtin will be rewarded the Order of Courage and Peshkov will receive the Hero of Russia award.
Revised:  Russia's President said Pozynich and Murakhtin will be rewarded the Order of Courage and Peshkov will receive the Hero of Russia award.
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Original:  officials said on yesterday Captain Konstantin Murakhtin, from the fighter jet shot down by a  on Tuesday, has been found alive.
Revised: Russian officials said on yesterday Captain Konstantin Murakhtin, from the fighter jet shot down by a on Tuesday, has been found alive.
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