wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: As they have done for the last four years, USGS scientists were measuring an approximate 100 square mile bulge in central Oregon near the South Sister this past August.
Revised: As they have done for the last four years, United States Geological Survey (USGS) scientists were measuring an approximate 100 square mile bulge in central Oregon near the South Sister this past August.
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Original:  The bulge is located 25 miles outside of the city of Bend and 3 miles from the South Sister.
Revised:  The bulge is located 25 miles outside of the city of Bend , Ore. and three miles from the South Sister.
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Original:  They also think the fluid covers an area about 1 mile across and extends to a depth of 65 feet.
Revised:  They also think the fluid covers an area about one mile across and extends to a depth of 65 feet.
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Original:  Ground swells aren't an extrodinary occurrence in geology.
Revised:  Ground swells aren't an extraodinary occurrence in geology.
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Original:  Nishizaki was best known for his work on the series Space Battleship Yamat 
Revised:  Nishizaki was best known for his work on the series Space Battleship Yamato. 
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Original:  Nishizaki co-created the Space Battleship Yamato series with Leiji Matsumoto .
Revised: Along with Leiji Matsumoto, Nishizaki co-created the Space Battleship Yamato series with Leiji Matsumoto .
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Original:  Nishizaki co-created the Space Battleship Yamato series with Leiji Matsumoto .
Revised:  Nishizaki co-created the Space Battleship Yamato series .
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Original:  The arguement also involved the Tohoku-shinsha Film Cor 
Revised:  The arguement also involved the Tohoku-shinsha Film Corp. 
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Original:  He later handed over his weapons to the polic 
Revised:  He later handed over his weapons to the police. 
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Original:  The coastguard recovered his body after 20 minuets but he died 2 hours later.
Revised:  The coastguard recovered his body after 20 minutes but he died 2 hours later.
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Original:  The pair later fell out after a dispute over francise rights.
Revised:  The pair later fell out after a dispute over franchise rights.
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Original:  The arguement also involved the Tohoku-shinsha Film Corp.
Revised:  The argument also involved the Tohoku-shinsha Film Corp.
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Original:  He was preparing to swim when he fell off .
Revised:  He had been preparing to swim when he fell off .
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Original:  He was preparing to swim when he fell off .
Revised:  He was preparing to swim .
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Original:  The coastguard recovered his body after 20 minutes but he died 2 hours later.
Revised:  The coastguard recovered his body after 20 minutes but he died two hours later.
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Original:  Along with Leiji Matsumoto, Nishizaki co-created the Space Battleship Yamato series .
Revised:  Nishizaki co-created the Space Battleship Yamato series .
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Original:  Along with Leiji Matsumoto, Nishizaki co-created the Space Battleship Yamato series .
Revised:  Along with Leiji Matsumoto, Nishizaki co-created Space Battleship Yamato series .
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Original:  Along with Leiji Matsumoto, Nishizaki co-created the Space Battleship Yamato series .
Revised:  Along with Leiji Matsumoto, Nishizaki co-created the Space Battleship Yamato with Leiji Matsumoto .
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Original:  It was also reported that he smuggled numerous weapons including an assault rifle and grenade launcher from the Philippines.
Revised:  It has been alleged that he smuggled numerous weapons including an assault rifle and grenade launcher from the Philippines.
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Original:  It was also reported that he smuggled numerous weapons including an assault rifle and grenade launcher from the Philippines.
Revised:  It was also reported that he smuggled arms including an assault rifle and grenade launcher from the Philippines.
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Original:  Eight people are currently being questions over the circumstances of Nishizaki's death
Revised:  Eight people are currently being questioned over the circumstances of Nishizaki's death
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Original: Nishizaki's career was sometimes controverisal ;
Revised: Nishizaki's career was sometimes controversial ;
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Original: On the 20th birthday of Nintendo's mascots, Mario and his brother Luigi, Nintendo has released it's newest version in the popular GameBoy line.
Revised: On the 20th birthday of Nintendo's mascots, Mario and his brother Luigi, Nintendo has released it's newest version in the popular Game Boy line.
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Original:  The GameBoy Micro is the smallest Nintendo released handheld yet.
Revised:  The Game Boy Micro is the smallest Nintendo released handheld yet.
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Original:  Unlike the other in the Advance generation of GameBoys, the handheld  can only play GameBoy Advance games and not other gameBoy games .
Revised:  Unlike the other in the Advance generation of GameBoys, the handheld can only play Game Boy Advance games and not other gameBoy games .
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Original:  The system also comes with a new link port.
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Original:  The handheld also features removable faceplates that can be purchased seperately although the system is sold with several
Revised:  The handheld includes multiple removable faceplates, with additional faceplates that can be purchased seperately although the system is sold with several
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Original:  The handheld also features removable faceplates that can be purchased seperately although the system is sold with several
Revised:  The handheld also features removable faceplates that can be purchased separately
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Original:  This system will have an MSRP of USD  99.99
Revised:  This system will have an MSRP of USD $99.99. On the 20th birthday of Nintendo's mascots, Mario and his brother Luigi, Nintendo has released its newest version in the popular Game Boy line. The Game Boy Micro is the smallest handheld release by Nintendo to date. Unlike other handhelds in the Game Boy Advance series, the Game Boy Micro can play only Game Boy Advance games, not games for the original Game Boy. The system comes with a new link port. The handheld includes multiple removable faceplates, with additional faceplates that can be purchased separately. This system will have an MSRP of USD $ 99.99
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Original: On the 20th birthday of Nintendo's mascots, Mario and his brother Luigi, Nintendo has released it's newest version in the popular Game Boy line.
Revised: On the 20th birthday of Nintendo's mascots, Mario and his brother Luigi, Nintendo has released the newest addition to the popular Game Boy line.
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Original:  Unlike other handhelds in the Game Boy Advance series, the Game Boy Micro can only play Game Boy Advance games and not games  for the original Game Boy .
Revised:  Unlike other handhelds in the Game Boy Advance series, the Game Boy Micro can only play Game Boy Advance games and not games designed for the original Game Boy .
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Original:  The handheld includes multiple removable faceplates, with additional faceplates that can be purchased separately.
Revised:  The handheld includes multiple removable faceplates, and additional faceplates can be purchased separately.
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Original:  This system will have an MSRP of USD$99.99
Revised:  This system has an MSRP of USD$99.99
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Original:  Both workers began to work the same day in the mine, and were native of the town of Cabildo, in Valparaíso Region    ] 
Revised:  Both workers began to work the same day in the mine, and were native of the town of Cabildo, in Valparaíso Region the companies] 
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Original:  Both workers began to work the same day in the mine  , and were native of the town of Cabildo, in Valparaíso Region.
Revised:  Both workers began working in the mine , and were native of the town of Cabildo, in Valparaíso Region.
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Original:  Both workers began to work the same day in the mine  , and were native of the town of Cabildo, in Valparaíso Region.
Revised:  Both workers began to work the same day in the mine , and were natives of Cabildo, a town in Valparaíso Region.
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Original:  Mauricio Silva, aged 21, sustained an eyeinjury , and was taken to the Regional Hospital of Copiapó.
Revised:  Mauricio Silva, aged 21, was injured in the eye , and was taken to the Regional Hospital of Copiapó.
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Original:  Mining Minister Laurence Golborne told El Mercurio that the companies "should be careful about the works that are being done in the mines along the country."
Revised:  Mining Minister Laurence Golborne told El Mercurio that mining companies "should be careful about the works that are being done in the mines along the country."
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Original:  The Los Reyes Mine belongs to Sociedad Legal Compañía Minera Del Sur (Del Sur Mining Company, Legal Society) , and it is dedicated to the extraction of copper . Golborne said that the mine was not authorized to handle explosives by Sernageomín (National Service of Geology and Mining)
Revised:  The Los Reyes copper mine belongs to Sociedad Legal Compañía Minera Del Sur (Del Sur Mining Company, Legal Society) , and it is dedicated to the extraction of copper . Golborne said that the mine was not authorized to handle explosives by Sernageomín (National Service of Geology and Mining)
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Original:  The Los Reyes Mine belongs to Sociedad Legal Compañía Minera Del Sur (Del Sur Mining Company, Legal Society) , and it is dedicated to the extraction of copper . Golborne said that the mine was not authorized to handle explosives by Sernageomín (National Service of Geology and Mining)
Revised:  The Los Reyes Mine belongs to Sociedad Legal Compañía Minera Del Sur (Del Sur Mining Company, Legal Society) . Golborne said that the mine was not authorized to handle explosives by Sernageomín (National Service of Geology and Mining)
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Original:  The Los Reyes Mine belongs to Sociedad Legal Compañía Minera Del Sur (Del Sur Mining Company, Legal Society) , and it is dedicated to the extraction of copper . Golborne said that the mine was not authorized to handle explosives by Sernageomín (National Service of Geology and Mining)
Revised:  The Los Reyes Mine belongs to Sociedad Legal Compañía Minera Del Sur (Del Sur Mining Company, Legal Society) , and it is dedicated to the extraction of copper . Golborne said that the mine was not authorized to utilize explosives by Sernageomín (National Service of Geology and Mining)
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Original:  According to today's statements, nor Valko, nor his colleagues had alerts about any possible attack.
Revised:  According to today's statements, neither Valko, nor his colleagues had alerts about any possible attack.
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Original:  Ernest Valko was a member of the Czechoslovakia parliament after the Velvet Revolution, serving as a deputy speaker of the lower house between 1990 and 1991.
Revised:  Valko was a member of the Czechoslovakia parliament after the Velvet Revolution, serving as a deputy speaker of the lower house between 1990 and 1991.
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Original:  In 1992 he led the Czechoslovak constitutional court since its establishment in April till the dissolution of Czechoslovakia at the end of the year.
Revised:  In 1992 , Valko led the Czechoslovak constitutional court since its establishment in April till the dissolution of Czechoslovakia at the end of the year.
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Original:  [[File:Conan.png|Conan O'Brien in 2007 ]] Monday marked O'Brien's return to late night television after his departure as host of The Tonight Show on NBC following the 2010 Tonight Show conflict, where Leno's program The Jay Leno Show was canceled after poor ratings, and NBC reinstated Leno as host of The Tonight Show  . O'Brien's program featured guests including curator Arlene Wagner of the Leavenworth Nutcracker Museum, actor Seth Rogen and actress Lea Michele.
Revised:  [[File:Conan.png|Conan O'Brien in 2007 ]] Monday marked O'Brien's return to late night television after his departure as host of The Tonight Show on NBC following the 2010 Tonight Show conflict, where Leno's program The Jay Leno Show , suffering poor ratings, and NBC reinstated Leno as host of The Tonight Show . O'Brien's program featured guests including curator Arlene Wagner of the Leavenworth Nutcracker Museum, actor Seth Rogen and actress Lea Michele.
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Original:  [[File:Conan.png|Conan O'Brien in 2007 ]] Monday marked O'Brien's return to late night television after his departure as host of The Tonight Show on NBC following the 2010 Tonight Show conflict, where Leno's program The Jay Leno Show was canceled after poor ratings, and NBC reinstated Leno as host of The Tonight Show  . O'Brien's program featured guests including curator Arlene Wagner of the Leavenworth Nutcracker Museum, actor Seth Rogen and actress Lea Michele.
Revised:  [[File:Conan.png|Conan O'Brien in 2007 ]] Monday marked O'Brien's return to late night television after his departure as host of The Tonight Show on NBC following the 2010 Tonight Show conflict, where Leno's program The Jay Leno Show was canceled after poor ratings, and NBC reinstated Leno as host of The Tonight Show host . O'Brien's program featured guests including curator Arlene Wagner of the Leavenworth Nutcracker Museum, actor Seth Rogen and actress Lea Michele.
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Original:  His guest schedule for Tuesday night 's program included actors Tom Hanks and Jack McBrayer, in addition to music from the group Soundgarden.
Revised:  His guest schedule for tonight 's program included actors Tom Hanks and Jack McBrayer, in addition to music from the group Soundgarden.
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Original:  His guest schedule for Tuesday night 's program included actors Tom Hanks and Jack McBrayer, in addition to music from the group Soundgarden.
Revised:  His guest schedule for Tuesday night 's program includes actors Tom Hanks and Jack McBrayer, in addition to music from the group Soundgarden.
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Original:   Conan was watched by over 4.1 million viewers on Monday, in its first program after the company Time Warner welcomed O'Brien to TBS . Nielsen ratings data made public on Tuesday showed that Leno's program The Tonight Show was only watched by 3.5 million viewers, and Letterman's Late Show was seen by 3.4 million people.
Revised:  The premiere of Conan was watched by over 4.1 million viewers on Monday, in its first program after the company Time Warner welcomed O'Brien to TBS . Nielsen ratings data made public on Tuesday showed that Leno's program The Tonight Show was only watched by 3.5 million viewers, and Letterman's Late Show was seen by 3.4 million people.
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Original:   Conan was watched by over 4.1 million viewers on Monday, in its first program after the company Time Warner welcomed O'Brien to TBS . Nielsen ratings data made public on Tuesday showed that Leno's program The Tonight Show was only watched by 3.5 million viewers, and Letterman's Late Show was seen by 3.4 million people.
Revised:  Conan was watched by over 4.1 million viewers . Nielsen ratings data made public on Tuesday showed that Leno's program The Tonight Show was only watched by 3.5 million viewers, and Letterman's Late Show was seen by 3.4 million people.
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Original:  The Daily Show with Jon Stewart and The Colbert Report were watched by 1.3 million and 1 million viewers, respectively   .
Revised:  The Daily Show with Jon Stewart and The Colbert Report were watched by 1.3 million and 1 million viewers, respectively . .
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Original:  When O'Brien left the long-running NBC talk show, Leno's program The Jay Leno Show , suffering poor ratings, was canceled, and Leno returned to his former role as The Tonight Show host .
Revised:  When O'Brien left the long-running NBC talk show, Leno's program The Jay Leno Show was canceled after poor ratings, was canceled, and Leno returned to his former role as The Tonight Show host .
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Original:  When O'Brien left the long-running NBC talk show, Leno's program The Jay Leno Show , suffering poor ratings, was canceled, and Leno returned to his former role as The Tonight Show host .
Revised:  When O'Brien left the long-running NBC talk show, Leno's program The Jay Leno Show , suffering poor ratings, and NBC reinstated Leno as host of The Tonight Show host .
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Original:  When O'Brien left the long-running NBC talk show, Leno's program The Jay Leno Show , suffering poor ratings, was canceled, and Leno returned to his former role as The Tonight Show host .
Revised:  When O'Brien left the long-running NBC talk show, Leno's program The Jay Leno Show , suffering poor ratings, was canceled, and Leno returned to his former role as The Tonight Show .
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Original: O'Brien's debut program , which, like Tonight, is in a talk format, featured guests including curator Arlene Wagner of the Leavenworth Nutcracker Museum, actor Seth Rogen and actress Lea Michele.
Revised: O'Brien's debut program featured guests including curator Arlene Wagner of the Leavenworth Nutcracker Museum, actor Seth Rogen and actress Lea Michele.
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Original:  His guest schedule for tonight 's program includes actors Tom Hanks and Jack McBrayer, in addition to music from the group Soundgarden.
Revised:  His guest schedule for tonight 's program included actors Tom Hanks and Jack McBrayer, in addition to music from the group Soundgarden.
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Original:  This Monday , the foundation had miscontinued Symbian OS , because this smartphone operating system had lost its popularity when Android came to market.
Revised:  Now , the foundation had miscontinued Symbian OS , because this smartphone operating system had lost its popularity when Android came to market.
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Original:  This Monday , the foundation had miscontinued Symbian OS , because this smartphone operating system had lost its popularity when Android came to market.
Revised:  This Monday , the foundation refused to continue the project , because this smartphone operating system had lost its popularity when Android came to market.
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Original: This Monday, Symbian Foundation had discontinued Symbian OS, as a result of its lost popularity since Android came to market.
Revised: On Monday, Symbian Foundation had discontinued Symbian OS, as a result of its lost popularity since Android came to market.
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Original: On Monday, Symbian Foundation had discontinued Symbian OS, as a result of its lost popularity since Android came to market.
Revised: On Monday, Symbian Foundation discontinued Symbian OS, as a result of its lost popularity since Android came to market.
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Original:  The Finnish telecommunications company Nokia, being one of the few hardware manufacturers who use the system on some of the models, announced that it takes over the development.
Revised:  The Finnish telecommunications company Nokia, being one of the few hardware manufacturers who use the system on some of the models, announced that it has taken over the development.
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Original:  The Finnish telecommunications company Nokia, being one of the few hardware manufacturers who use the system on some of the models, announced that it has taken over the  development.
Revised:  The Finnish telecommunications company Nokia, being one of the few hardware manufacturers who use the system on some of the models, announced that it has taken over the operating system's development.
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Original:  During the next several months, most Symbian Foundation employees  who were completely governing the project previously, will retire.
Revised:  During the next several months, most Symbian Foundation employees , who were completely governing the project previously, will retire.
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Original:  The result of this is that the current governance structure for the Symbian platform - the foundation - is no longer appropriate."
Revised:  The result of this is that the current governance structure for the Symbian platform — the foundation — is no longer appropriate."
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Original:  It is possible , because the Symbian OS is currently open source and freely redistributable.
Revised:  This is possible because the Symbian OS is currently open source and freely redistributable.
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Original:  In an interview with ZDNet, the head of Nokia smartphone business Jo Harlow said that the takeover was significantly caused by that Nokia hardware was the major one using the OS.
Revised:  In an interview with ZDNet, the head of Nokia smartphone business Jo Harlow said that the takeover was in significant part because Nokia hardware was the major one using the OS.
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Original:  After she assulted one of the crew members she was handcuffed to her seat until the plane landed in Bermud 
Revised:  After she assulted one of the crew members she was handcuffed to her seat until the plane landed in Bermuda. 
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Original:  Even when police took her she was struggling and tried to run off  
Revised:  Even when police took her she was struggling and tried to run off ." 
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Original:  The local authorities were notified of this incident and, in accordance with our procedures, the aircraft was met by the police upon landing at Bermuda airport where the passenger was removed from the flight  
Revised:  The local authorities were notified of this incident and, in accordance with our procedures, the aircraft was met by the police upon landing at Bermuda airport where the passenger was removed from the flight ". 
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Original:  The Bowing 767 owned by Thomson Airways landed in Bermuda after the women assulted a male flight attendant.
Revised:  The Boeing 767 owned by Thomson Airways landed in Bermuda after the women assulted a male flight attendant.
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Original:  The Bowing 767 owned by Thomson Airways landed in Bermuda after the women assulted a male flight attendant.
Revised:  The Bowing 767 owned by Thomson Airways landed in Bermuda after the women assaulted a male flight attendant.
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Original:  According to The Sun newspaper  the 45-year-old women was drinking alcohol from a secret stash.
Revised:  According to The Sun newspaper , the 45-year-old women was drinking alcohol from a secret stash.
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Original:  After she became disruptive crew tried to restrain her . After she assaulted one of the crew members she was handcuffed to her seat  until the plane landed in Bermuda.
Revised:  Cabin crew tried to restrain her . After she assaulted one of the crew members she was handcuffed to her seat until the plane landed in Bermuda.
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Original:  After she became disruptive crew tried to restrain her . After she assaulted one of the crew members she was handcuffed to her seat  until the plane landed in Bermuda.
Revised:  After she became disruptive crew tried to restrain her after she became disruptive. She was handcuffed to her seat until the plane landed in Bermuda.
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Original:  Thomson Airways released a offical statement on the incident.
Revised:  Thomson Airways released an official statement regarding the incident.
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Original:  The women has since returned to the United Kingdom after she was escorted by two Bermudian police officers to Manchester Airport
Revised:  The women has since returned to the UK after she was escorted by two Bermudian police officers to Manchester Airport
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