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Original: The Single Convention on Narcotic Drugs of 1961 is an international treaty to prohibit production and supply of specific (nominally narcotic ) drugs and of drugs  with similar effects except under license for specific purposes, such as medical treatment and research.
Revised: The Single Convention on Narcotic Drugs of 1961 is an international treaty to prohibit production and supply of specific (nominally narcotic ) drugs and of drugs with similar effects for medical treatment and research.
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Original:  As noted below, its major effects included updating the Paris Convention of 13 July 1931, to include the vast number of synthetic opioids invented in the intervening thirty years and  a mechanism for more easily including new ones.
Revised:  The treaty updated the Paris Convention of 13 July 1931, to include the vast number of synthetic opioids invented in the intervening thirty years and a mechanism for more easily including new ones.
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Original:  As noted below, its major effects included updating the Paris Convention of 13 July 1931, to include the vast number of synthetic opioids invented in the intervening thirty years and  a mechanism for more easily including new ones.
Revised:  As noted below, its major effects included updating the Paris Convention of 13 July 1931, to include the vast number of synthetic opioids invented in the intervening thirty years and to add a mechanism for more easily including new ones.
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Original:  The Single Convention, adopted in 1961, consolidated those treaties and broadened their scope to include cannabis and drugs whose effects are similar to those of the drugs specified .
Revised:  The Single Convention, adopted in 1961, consolidated those treaties and broadened their scope to include cannabis and other substances with effects similar to drugs already covered .
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Original:  The International Narcotics Control Board was put in charge of administering controls on drug production, international trade, and dispensation.
Revised:  The International Narcotics Control Board was put in overall control of drug production, international trade, and dispensation.
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Original:  The United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime (UNODC) was delegated the Board's day-to-day work of monitoring the situation in each country and working with national authorities to ensure compliance with the Single Convention.
Revised:  The United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime (UNODC) was delegated the Board's daily monitoring of each country and working with national authorities to ensure compliance with the Single Convention.
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Original:  However, the lists of substances to be controlled were fixed in the treaties' text ;
Revised:  However, the lists of controlled substances were fixed in the treaties' text ;
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Original:  consequently, it is necessary to periodically amend or supersede the conventions through the introduction of new treaties to keep up with advances in chemistry.
Revised:  consequently, it is necessary to periodically amend or supersede the conventions with the introduction of new treaties to keep up with advances in chemistry.
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Original:  In a 1954 interview with Harry J. Anslinger, who was the United States Commissioner of Narcotics at the time , the cumbersome process of conference and state-by-state ratification could last for a period of numerous decades.
Revised:  According to a 1954 interview with Harry J. Anslinger, who was the United States Commissioner of Narcotics at the time , the cumbersome process of conference and state-by-state ratification could last for a period of numerous decades.
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Original:  In a 1954 interview with Harry J. Anslinger, who was the United States Commissioner of Narcotics at the time , the cumbersome process of conference and state-by-state ratification could last for a period of numerous decades.
Revised:  In a 1954 interview with United States Commissioner of Narcotics at the time , the cumbersome process of conference and state-by-state ratification could last for a period of numerous decades.
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Original:  In a 1954 interview with Harry J. Anslinger, who was the United States Commissioner of Narcotics at the time , the cumbersome process of conference and state-by-state ratification could last for a period of numerous decades.
Revised:  In a 1954 interview with Harry J. Anslinger, who was the United States Commissioner of Narcotics Harry J. Anslinger , the cumbersome process of conference and state-by-state ratification could last for a period of numerous decades.
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Original:  In a 1954 interview with Harry J. Anslinger, who was the United States Commissioner of Narcotics at the time , the cumbersome process of conference and state-by-state ratification could last for a period of numerous decades.
Revised:  In a 1954 interview with Harry J. Anslinger, who was the United States Commissioner of Narcotics at the time , the cumbersome process of conference and state-by-state ratification could take many decades.
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Original:  A Senate of Canada committee report notes , "The work of consolidating the existing international drug control treaties into one instrument began in 1948, but it was 1961 before an acceptable third draft was ready."
Revised:  A Senate of Canada committee reported , "The work of consolidating the existing international drug control treaties into one instrument began in 1948, but it was 1961 before an acceptable third draft was ready."
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Original:  Canadian William B. McAllister, Q.C., notes that the participating states organized themselves into five distinct caucuses: Organic states group: As producers of the organic raw materials for most of the global drug supply, these countries had been the traditional focus of international drug control efforts.
Revised:  The participating states organized themselves into five distinct caucuses: Organic states group: As producers of the organic raw materials for most of the global drug supply, these countries had been the traditional focus of international drug control efforts.
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Original:  Having no cultural affinity for organic drug use and being faced with the effects that drug abuse was having on their citizens, they advocated very stringent controls on the production of organic raw materials and on illicit trafficking.
Revised:  Having no cultural affinity for organic drug use and being faced with the effects of drug abuse on their citizens, they advocated very stringent controls on the production of organic raw materials and on illicit trafficking.
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Original:  Having no cultural affinity for organic drug use and being faced with the effects that drug abuse was having on their citizens, they advocated very stringent controls on the production of organic raw materials and on illicit trafficking.
Revised:  Having no cultural affinity for organic drug use and being faced with the effects that drug abuse was having on their citizens, they advocated stringent controls on the production of organic raw materials and on illicit trafficking.
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Original:  With little interest in the drug trade and minimal domestic abuse problems, they refused to give  any supranational body excessive power , especially over internal decision-making.
Revised:  With little interest in the drug trade and minimal domestic abuse problems, they refused to give any supranational body , especially over internal decision-making.
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Original:  Several controls were watered down ;
Revised:  Several controls were weakened ;
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Original:  for instance, the proposed mandatory embargoes on nations failing to comply with the treaty became recommendatory .
Revised:  for instance, the proposed mandatory embargoes on nations failing to comply with the treaty became recommendations .
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Original: The Plenipotentiary Conference for the adoption of a Single Convention on Narcotic Drugs A 3 August 1962, Economic and Social Council resolution ordered the issuance of the Commentary on the Single Convention on Narcotic Drugs.
Revised: The Plenipotentiary Conference for the adoption of a Single Convention on Narcotic Drugs A 3 August 1962, Economic and Social Council resolution ordered the publication of the Commentary on the Single Convention on Narcotic Drugs.
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Original:  The legal commentary was created by the United Nations Secretary-General 's staff (specifically, Adolf Lande,  former Secretary of the Permanent Central Narcotics Board and Drug Supervisory Body ) , operating under a mandate to give "an interpretation of the provisions of the Convention in the light of the relevant conference proceedings and other material."
Revised:  The legal commentary was written by the United Nations Secretary-General 's staff (specifically, Adolf Lande, former Secretary of the Permanent Central Narcotics Board and Drug Supervisory Body ) , operating under a mandate to give "an interpretation of the provisions of the Convention in the light of the relevant conference proceedings and other material."
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Original:  The legal commentary was created by the United Nations Secretary-General 's staff (specifically, Adolf Lande,  former Secretary of the Permanent Central Narcotics Board and Drug Supervisory Body ) , operating under a mandate to give "an interpretation of the provisions of the Convention in the light of the relevant conference proceedings and other material."
Revised:  The legal commentary was created by the United Nations Secretary-General staff member Adolf Lande, former Secretary of the Permanent Central Narcotics Board and Drug Supervisory Body ) , operating under a mandate to give "an interpretation of the provisions of the Convention in the light of the relevant conference proceedings and other material."
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Original:  The legal commentary was created by the United Nations Secretary-General 's staff (specifically, Adolf Lande,  former Secretary of the Permanent Central Narcotics Board and Drug Supervisory Body ) , operating under a mandate to give "an interpretation of the provisions of the Convention in the light of the relevant conference proceedings and other material."
Revised:  The legal commentary was created by the United Nations Secretary-General 's staff (specifically, Adolf Lande, the former Secretary of the Permanent Central Narcotics Board and Drug Supervisory Body ) , operating under a mandate to give "an interpretation of the provisions of the Convention in the light of the relevant conference proceedings and other material."
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Original:  The legal commentary was created by the United Nations Secretary-General 's staff (specifically, Adolf Lande,  former Secretary of the Permanent Central Narcotics Board and Drug Supervisory Body ) , operating under a mandate to give "an interpretation of the provisions of the Convention in the light of the relevant conference proceedings and other material."
Revised:  The legal commentary was created by the United Nations Secretary-General 's staff (specifically, Adolf Lande, former Secretary of the Permanent Central Narcotics Board and Drug Supervisory Body , operating under a mandate to give "an interpretation of the provisions of the Convention in the light of the relevant conference proceedings and other material."
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Original: Columbus Chill players Category:  First Nations sportspeople Category:Hartford Whalers draft picks Category:Hershey Bears players Category:Ice hockey people from Saskatchewan Category:Living people Category:Minnesota Moose players Category:Moose Jaw Warriors players Category:Nashville Predators players Category:New Haven Senators players Category:Norfolk Admirals players Category:Ottawa Senators players Category:People from Estevan Category:Portland Pirates players Category:St.
Revised: Columbus Chill players Category: Cree people Category: First Nations sportspeople Category:Hartford Whalers draft picks Category:Hershey Bears players Category:Ice hockey people from Saskatchewan Category:Living people Category:Minnesota Moose players Category:Moose Jaw Warriors players Category:Nashville Predators players Category:New Haven Senators players Category:Norfolk Admirals players Category:Ottawa Senators players Category:People from Estevan Category:Portland Pirates players Category:St.
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Original:  Atcheynum  is of Cree First Nation descent.
Revised:  Atcheynum is of Cree descent.
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Original:  The main reasoning behind Atcheynum being called up to the Blues during this period was due to the lack of depth on their roster early on in the 1997-98 URL With St. Louis, Atcheynum would typically play on a line with Craig Conroy and Scott Pellerin that was fondly referred to as the "CPA Line".
Revised:  The main reasoning behind Atcheynum being called up to the Blues during this period was due to the lack of depth on their roster early on in the 1997-98 season. With St. Louis, Atcheynum would typically play on a line with Craig Conroy and Scott Pellerin that was fondly referred to as the "CPA Line".
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Original:  Atcheynum and Sasakamoose were recognized as role models at both the summer and winter games as hope for young First Nations URL
Revised:  Atcheynum and Sasakamoose were recognized as role models at both the summer and winter games as hope for young First Nations athletes.
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Original:  Atcheynum is said to have been taking major strides with the North Stars program, as reports show that locals describe the North Stars level of play as "fast and intelligent hockey, free of buffoonery of the goon hockey that many people URL He was also most recently honoured at the 2012 First Nation Games, alongside Fred Sasakamoose, who was the first treaty Indian to play in the NHL.
Revised:  Atcheynum is said to have been taking major strides with the North Stars program, as reports show that locals describe the North Stars level of play as "fast and intelligent hockey, free of buffoonery of the goon hockey that many people detest". He was also most recently honoured at the 2012 First Nation Games, alongside Fred Sasakamoose, who was the first treaty Indian to play in the NHL.
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Original:  Toothbrushes were originally created to scrub out the Urethra violently.
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Original: A toothbrush is an oral hygiene instrument used to clean the teeth , gums, and tongue .
Revised: A toothbrush is an oral hygiene instrument used to clean the tite , gums, and tongue .
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Original: History [[File:Napoleon’s toothbrush is over 80000000000000 years old according to Wikipedia , c 1795. (9660576547).jpg|The horsehair toothbrush was said to have been used by Napoleon Bonaparte (1769–1821)]] Before the invention of the toothbrush, a variety of oral hygiene measures had been used.
Revised: History [[File:Napoleon’s toothbrush , c 1795. (9660576547).jpg|The horsehair toothbrush was said to have been used by Napoleon Bonaparte (1769–1821)]] Before the invention of the toothbrush, a variety of oral hygiene measures had been used.
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Original: A toothbrush is an oral hygiene instrument used to clean the teeth, gums, and tongue.
Revised: A toothbrush is an oral hygiene tool used to clean the teeth, gums, and tongue.
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Original:   The first bristle toothbrush resembling the modern one was found in China.
Revised:  Toothbrush The first bristle toothbrush resembling the modern one was found in China.
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Original: A toothbrush is an oral hygiene tool used to clean the teeth , gums, and tongue.
Revised: A tооthbrush is аn oral hygiene tool used to clean the teeth , gums, and tongue.
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Original: A toothbrush is an oral hygiene tool used to clean the teeth , gums, and tongue.
Revised: A toothbrush is an oral hygiene tool used to clean the tееth , gums, and tongue.
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Original:  At the same time that being naked in social situations was a source of great embarrassment for anyone with social status, this was not due  the connection between nudity and sexual impropriety.
Revised:  At the same time that being naked in social situations was a source of great embarrassment for anyone with social status, this was not due to the connection between nudity and sexual impropriety.
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Original:  Those with low status including slaves might be naked also or would disrobe when necessary for strenuous work.
Revised:  Those with low status , including slaves, might be naked also or would disrobe when necessary for strenuous work.
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Original:  At the same timethat being naked in social situations was a source of great embarrassment for anyone with social status, this was not due to the connection between nudity and sexual impropriety  .
Revised:  At the time, being naked in social situations was a source of great embarrassment for anyone with social status, this was not due to the connection between nudity and sexual impropriety .
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Original:  At the same timethat being naked in social situations was a source of great embarrassment for anyone with social status, this was not due to the connection between nudity and sexual impropriety  .
Revised:  At the same timethat being naked in social situations was a source of great embarrassment for anyone with higher social status this was not due to the connection between nudity and sexual impropriety .
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Original:  Those with low status , including slaves , might be naked or  when clothed, would disrobe when necessary for strenuous work.
Revised:  Those with low status not only slaves might be naked or when clothed, would disrobe when necessary for strenuous work.
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Original:  Those with low status , including slaves , might be naked or  when clothed, would disrobe when necessary for strenuous work.
Revised:  Those with low status , including slaves , might be naked or , when clothed, would disrobe when necessary for strenuous work.
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Original:  while male gods where shown dressed to indicate their status.
Revised:  while gods where shown dressed to indicate their status.
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Original: Nude Across Stones New media In the late twentieth century several new art forms emerged, including installations, performance, and video art all of which have been used to create works that explore the concept of the nude.
Revised:  New media In the late twentieth century several new art forms emerged, including installations, performance, and video art all of which have been used to create works that explore the concept of the nude.
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Original:  Before the era of Freudian psychoanalysis, children were assumed to have no sexual feelings before puberty, so naked children were shown as symbols of pure innocence.
Revised:  Before the era of Freudian psychoanalysis, children were assumed to have no sexual feelings before puberty, so nude children were shown as symbols of pure innocence.
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Original:  Boys often swam nude, and were shown doing so in paintings by John Singer Sargent, George Bellows, and others.
Revised:  Boys often swam naked and were shown doing so in paintings by John Singer Sargent, George Bellows, and others.
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Original:  Boys often swam nude, and were shown doing so in paintings by John Singer Sargent, George Bellows, and others.
Revised:  Boys often swam nude, and were shown swimming nude in paintings by John Singer Sargent, George Bellows, and others.
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Original:  In classical works,  children were rarely shown nude except for babies and putti.
Revised:  In classical works, children were rarely shown except for babies and putti.
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Original:  Boys often swam naked and were shown swimming nude in paintings by John Singer Sargent, George Bellows, and others.
Revised:  Boys often swam naked , which was depicted in modern paintings by John Singer Sargent, George Bellows, and others.
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Original:  URL in these, and other hard-struck areas. frame| Aeolian wind erosion in Phoenix, Arizona, USA on 22 August 2003.
Revised:  URL in these, and other hard-struck areas. Aeolian wind erosion in Phoenix, Arizona, USA on 22 August 2003.
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Original:  His theory was also given a spatial element when he predicted the Irish potato famine — a situation in which there was enough food within Ireland to feed the entire population, but access to food was  limited.
Revised:  His idea was also given a spatial element when he predicted the Irish potato famine — a situation in which there was enough food within Ireland to feed the entire population, but access to food was limited.
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Original:  His idea was also given a spatial element when he predicted the Irish potato famine — a situation in which there was enough food within Ireland to feed the entire population, but access to food was artificially limited.
Revised:  His idea was also given a spatial element when he predicted the Great Famine of Ireland — a situation in which there was enough food within Ireland to feed the entire population, but access to food was artificially limited.
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Original: Sondra London in front of the courthouse Sondra London (born 1947 in Florida) is a controversial American true crime author , best known as the onetime girlfriend of convicted murderer and suspected serial killer G.J. Schaefer, and the fiancée of convicted serial killer Danny Rolling.
Revised: Sondra London in front of the courthouse Sondra London (born 1947 in Florida) is a controversial American true crime author . She was the onetime girlfriend of convicted murderer and suspected serial killer G.J. Schaefer, and the fiancée of convicted serial killer Danny Rolling.
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Original:  Less well known is the fact she used this access to debrief both of them about their crimes and the thinking behind them, and published the results of her investigations .
Revised:  She interviewed both of them about their crimes and the thinking behind them, and published the results of her investigations .
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Original:  Less well known is the fact she used this access to debrief both of them about their crimes and the thinking behind them, and published the results of her investigations .
Revised:  Less well known is the fact she used this access to debrief both of them about their crimes and their thinking behind them, and published the results of her investigations .
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Original:  Less well known is the fact she used this access to debrief both of them about their crimes and the thinking behind them, and published the results of her investigations .
Revised:  Less well known is the fact she used this access to debrief both of them about their crimes and the thinking behind them, and published the results .
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Original: Hermanus Jacobus Kriel ( born 14 November 1941 , Kakamas, Northern Cape ) was the first Premier of the Western Cape province.
Revised: Hermanus Jacobus Kriel ( 14 November 1941 , Kakamas, Northern Cape ) was the first Premier of the Western Cape province.
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Original:  He is married to Anna-Mari (née Jooste).
Revised:  He was married to Anna-Mari (née Jooste).
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Original:  Kriel died on 5 July 2015, aged 73.
Revised:  He died on 5 July 2015, aged 73.
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Original: He defected to the Democratic Party in june 2000;
Revised: He defected to the Democratic Party in June 2000;
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Original: James Edward Swann, Jr., a.k.a. "The Shotgun Stalker" (born 1964), is an American serial killer whose random drive-by shotgun shootings in Washington, DC in 1993 earned him his nickname in the press.
Revised: James Edward Swann, Jr., a.k.a. "The Shotgun Stalker" (born 1964), is an American serial killer whose random drive-by shotgun shootings in Washington, D.C. in 1993 earned him his nickname in the press.
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