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Original:  Major General Julius Oketta was also awarded a medal of honor by the President of Liberia for his endless efforts in the fight against Ebola. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Uganda Senior Staff College UPDF
Revised:  Major General Julius Oketta was also awarded a medal of honor by the President of Liberia for his endless efforts in the fight against Ebola. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: On 10 January , 2014, Whitford announced she would run in 2014 for Montana Senate, in the District 8 seat currently represented by Shannon Augare.
Revised: On 10 January 2014, Whitford announced she would run in 2014 for Montana Senate, in the District 8 seat currently represented by Shannon Augare.
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Original: Living people Category:Members of the Montana House of Representatives Category:Montana Democrats Category:Native American  state legislators in Montana Category:Native American women in politics Category:Women state legislators in Montana Category:People from Cut Bank, Montana Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Montana State University–Northern alumni Category:Montana State University alumni Category:Educators from Montana Category:American women educato
Revised: Living people Category:Members of the Montana House of Representatives Category:Montana Democrats Category:Native American politicians Category:Native American state legislators in Montana Category:Native American women in politics Category:Women state legislators in Montana Category:People from Cut Bank, Montana Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Montana State University–Northern alumni Category:Montana State University alumni Category:Educators from Montana Category:American women educato
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Original: In 2004, at the rank of Lietenant Colonel, he was a member of the pioneer class to attend the Uganda Senor Command and Staff College, at Kimaka, Jinja, Eastern Uganda, under its first Commandant, Lieutenant General Ivan Koreta.
Revised: In 2004, at the rank of Colonel, he was a member of the pioneer class to attend the Uganda Senor Command and Staff College, at Kimaka, Jinja, Eastern Uganda, under its first Commandant, Lieutenant General Ivan Koreta.
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Original: In 2004, at the rank of Lietenant Colonel, he was a member of the pioneer class to attend the Uganda Senor Command and Staff College, at Kimaka, Jinja, Eastern Uganda, under its first Commandant, Lieutenant General Ivan Koreta.
Revised: In 2004, at the rank of Lietenant Colonel, he was a member of the pioneer class to attend the Uganda Senior Command and Staff College, at Kimaka, Jinja, Eastern Uganda, under its first Commandant, Lieutenant General Ivan Koreta.
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Original: Brigadier Peter Kerim (1955 - 2012) was a military officer in Uganda.
Revised: Brigadier Peter Kerim (1955 – 2012) was a military officer in Uganda.
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Original:  In the 1990's he was one of he commanders in the Ituri conflict in the Democratic Republic of he Congo.
Revised:  In the 1990s he was one of he commanders in the Ituri conflict in the Democratic Republic of he Congo.
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Original:   He joined Indian Civil Services in November 1921 and was posted as Sub-Collector at Madras.
Revised:  Career He joined Indian Civil Services in November 1921 and was posted as Sub-Collector at Madras.
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Original:  Justice Shahabuddin also chaired the Constitution Commission   .
Revised:  Justice Shahabuddin also chaired the Constitution Commission . .
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Original: On 20 December 2012, he is found guilty of genocide, direct and public incitement to commit genocide and rape as a crime against humanity and sentenced to 35 years in jail .
Revised: On 20 December 2012, he was found guilty of genocide, direct and public incitement to commit genocide and rape as a crime against humanity and sentenced to 35 years in jail .
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Original: On 20 December 2012, he is found guilty of genocide, direct and public incitement to commit genocide and rape as a crime against humanity and sentenced to 35 years in jail .
Revised: On 20 December 2012, he is found guilty of genocide, direct and public incitement to commit genocide and rape as a crime against humanity and sentenced to 35 years in jail ,
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Original: The concept is applicable to adults who are under care such as elderly people, disabled people , and people with mental health problems.
Revised: The concept is applicable to adults who are under care such as elderly people, people living with disability , and people with mental health problems.
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Original:  Wolpert's argument was that a paternalistic approach to disabled people , prioritizing safeguarding over the rights of individuals to independent decision-making, is a limitation on personal freedom.
Revised:  Wolpert's argument was that a paternalistic approach to people living with disability , prioritizing safeguarding over the rights of individuals to independent decision-making, is a limitation on personal freedom.
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Original:  Internalisation of low expectations causes the disabled person to believe that they are less capable than others in similar situations.
Revised:  Internalisation of low expectations causes the person with a disability to believe that they are less capable than others in similar situations.
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Original:  She is the first Coptic woman to head an Egyptian political party.
Revised:  She was the first Coptic woman to head an Egyptian political party.
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Original:  As president of the Constitution Party, Hala Shukrallah has articulated as major goals the revitalization and expansion of the party, as well as the achievement of revolutionary objectives, such as social justice, repeal of the protest law, the promotion of human rights and civil liberties, opposition to military domination of politics, and freedom for political prisoners.
Revised:  As president of the Constitution Party, Hala Shukrallah had articulated as major goals the revitalization and expansion of the party, as well as the achievement of revolutionary objectives, such as social justice, repeal of the protest law, the promotion of human rights and civil liberties, opposition to military domination of politics, and freedom for political prisoners.
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Original:  As president of the Constitution Party, Hala Shukrallah has articulated as major goals the revitalization and expansion of the party, as well as the achievement of revolutionary objectives, such as social justice, repeal of the protest law, the promotion of human rights and civil liberties, opposition to military domination of politics, and freedom for political prisoners.
Revised:  As president of the Constitution Party, Hala Shukrallah has articulated as major goals the revitalization and expansion of the party, as well as the achievement of revolutionary objectives, such as repeal of the protest law, the promotion of human rights and civil liberties, opposition to military domination of politics, and freedom for political prisoners.
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Original:  As president of the Constitution Party, Hala Shukrallah has articulated as major goals the revitalization and expansion of the party, as well as the achievement of revolutionary objectives, such as social justice, repeal of the protest law, the promotion of human rights and civil liberties, opposition to military domination of politics, and freedom for political prisoners.
Revised:  As president of the Constitution Party, Hala Shukrallah has articulated as major goals the revitalization and expansion of the party, as well as the achievement of revolutionary objectives, such as social justice, repeal of the protest law, opposition to military domination of politics, and freedom for political prisoners.
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Original: Hala Shukrallah  is the former president of the Egyptian Constitution Party, having succeeded Sayed Kassem as the party's leader.
Revised: Hala Shukrallah ( is the former president of the Egyptian Constitution Party, having succeeded Sayed Kassem as the party's leader.
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Original: Hala Shukrallah (  is the former president of the Egyptian Constitution Party, having succeeded Sayed Kassem as the party's leader.
Revised: Hala Shukrallah ( ) is the former president of the Egyptian Constitution Party, having succeeded Sayed Kassem as the party's leader.
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Original:  From this house, he directed the struggle for Independence of Zambia finally achieved on 24th December URL The monument was officially opened by Dr Kenneth Kaunda on 23rd October 1968.
Revised:  From this house, he directed the struggle for Independence of Zambia finally achieved on 24th December URL The monument was officially opened by Dr Kenneth Kaunda on 23 October 1968.
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Original:  Three houses are included in the protected  and have been restored as nearly as possible to their 1962 condition by the demolition of improvements effected since that date.
Revised:  Three houses are included in the protected monument, and have been restored as nearly as possible to their 1962 condition by the demolition of improvements effected since that date.
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Original:  House No. 394 has been redecorated in its original colour scheme  and much of the furniture and personal effects used by the Kenneth Kaunda family at that time has been replaced in the original positions.
Revised:  House No. 394 has been redecorated in its original colour scheme , and much of the furniture and personal effects used by the Kenneth Kaunda family at that time has been replaced in the original positions.
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Original: Chilenje House 394  is a house in which Dr Kenneth Kaunda lived from January 1960 to December 1962 and later to become first President of Zambia.
Revised: Chilenje House 394 is a house in which Dr Kenneth Kaunda lived from January 1960 to December 1962. He later became the first President of Zambia.
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Original:  From this house, he directed the struggle for Independence of Zambia  finally achieved on 24 December 1964.
Revised:  From this house, he directed the struggle for Independence of Zambia , which was finally achieved on 24 December 1964.
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Original: Chilenje House 394,  in Chilenje, Lusaka, Zambia is a house in which Dr Kenneth Kaunda lived from January 1960 to December 1962.
Revised: Chilenje House 394, located in Chilenje, Lusaka, Zambia is a house in which Dr Kenneth Kaunda lived from January 1960 to December 1962.
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Original:  It is described as "a simple residence a two-bedroom house with a small living room , kitchen and two bedrooms .
Revised:  It is described as a simple two-bed roomed residential house with a small living room , kitchen and two bedrooms .
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Original:  It is described as "a simple residence a two-bedroom house with a small living room , kitchen and two bedrooms .
Revised:  It is described as "a simple residence a two-bedroom house with a small living room and a kitchen .
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Original:  Founded in 1900, it was named for the marshal Possel-Deydier, who was killed in combat against Rabih az-Zubayr at Kouno the year before.
Revised:  Founded in 1900, it was renamed for Marshal Possel-Deydier, who was killed in combat against Rabih az-Zubayr at Kouno the year before.
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Original:  It is the head of the road connecting the Ubangi to Fort Sibut and  Lake Chad.
Revised:  Its importance derived from the use of the Kémo in provisioning Fort Sibut and Lake Chad.
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Original:  It was the site of the confinement of  ‘Asil, the Wadai rebel, when he was detained by the French in 1903.
Revised:  It was the site of the confinement of Adam ‘Asil, the Wadai rebel, when he was detained by the French in 1903.
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Original:  Although there had been a fight around a month ago involving Cheyenne Dog Soldiers at Fremont's Orchard, Lean Bear was confident that the violence wouldn't be associated with his peaceful tribe and was not concerned as the soldiers got closer.
Revised:  Although there had been a fight around a month previous involving Cheyenne Dog Soldiers at Fremont's Orchard, Lean Bear was confident that the violence wouldn't be associated with his peaceful tribe and was not concerned as the soldiers got closer.
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Original: Murder of Lean Bear On May 16, 1864, less than 15 months after meeting Lincoln in Washington, Lean Bear, Black Kettle, and others in the tribe were camping on their buffalo hunting grounds near Ash Creek.
Revised: Killing of Lean Bear On May 16, 1864, less than 15 months after meeting Lincoln in Washington, Lean Bear, Black Kettle, and others in the tribe were camping on their buffalo hunting grounds near Ash Creek.
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Original:  Aftermath of the Murder Rising tensions caused by the murder of Lean Bear, along with Eayre's other Indian camp raids, is heavily attributed to the Sand Creek Massacre that occurred six months later.
Revised:  Aftermath of the killing Rising tensions caused by the murder of Lean Bear, along with Eayre's other Indian camp raids, is heavily attributed to the Sand Creek Massacre that occurred six months later.
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Original:  Aftermath of the Murder Rising tensions caused by the murder of Lean Bear, along with Eayre's other Indian camp raids, is heavily attributed to the Sand Creek Massacre that occurred six months later.
Revised:  Aftermath of the Murder Rising tensions caused by the death of Lean Bear, along with Eayre's other Indian camp raids, is heavily attributed to the Sand Creek Massacre that occurred six months later.
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Original:  Lean Bear's brother, Bull Bear, was livid after the murder and felt compelled to violence against the white men, a desire he had never felt before.
Revised:  Lean Bear's brother, Bull Bear, was livid after the killing and felt compelled to violence against the white men, a desire he had never felt before.
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Original:  His work towards peace between his people and the American settlers in the Southern Plains were cut short when he was murdered by the 1st Colorado Cavalry Regiment and violent retaliations ensued.
Revised:  His work towards peace between his people and the American settlers in the Southern Plains were cut short when he was killed by the 1st Colorado Cavalry Regiment and violent retaliations ensued.
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Original: Killing of Lean Bear On May 16, 1864, less than 15 months after meeting Lincoln in Washington, Lean Bear, Black Kettle, and others in the tribe were camping on their buffalo hunting grounds near Ash Creek.
Revised: Murder of Lean Bear On May 16, 1864, less than 15 months after meeting Lincoln in Washington, Lean Bear, Black Kettle, and others in the tribe were camping on their buffalo hunting grounds near Ash Creek.
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Original: Death On 15 September 1914 Christian Frederick Beyers, Commandant-General of the armed forces and an old comrade of , resigned his commission and sent his car to fetch the later from Johannesburg to Pretoria as he wished to consult with him.
Revised: Death On 15 September 1914 Christian Frederick Beyers, Commandant-General of the armed forces and an old comrade of , resigned his commission and sent his car to fetch the latter from Johannesburg to Pretoria as he wished to consult with him.
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Original: Not long after 's funeral the short-lived Maritz Rebellion broke out and De Wet, Beyers, General Maritz, commander of a force on the border of the German colony, Kemp, and other Boer veterans took up arms again but most of the army remained loyal and the rebellion was swiftly put down by Botha and Smuts.
Revised: Not long after 's funeral the short-lived Maritz rebellion broke out and De Wet, Beyers, General Maritz, commander of a force on the border of the German colony, Kemp, and other Boer veterans took up arms again but most of the army remained loyal and the rebellion was swiftly put down by Botha and Smuts.
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Original:  Contemplating what he feels is certain destruction for the Afrikaner people, he calls on to lead their volk to victory.
Revised:  Contemplating what he feels is certain destruction for the Afrikaner people, he calls on to lead their people to victory.
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Original: Early life Born on Doornfontein Farm in the Winburg District of the Orange Free State, Koos was the son of Adrianus Johannes Gijsbertus de la Rey and Adriana Wilhelmina van Rooyen. was a Boer of Spanish, French Huguenot and Dutch descent.
Revised: Early life Born on Doornfontein Farm in the Winburg District of the Orange Free State, Koos was the son of Adrianus Johannes Gijsbertus de la Rey and Adriana Wilhelmina van Rooyen. was a Boer of French Huguenot and Dutch descent.
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Original:  Generally plot sampling assumes that on a given survey you will identify all of the animals in the survey region with probability one .
Revised:  Generally plot sampling assumes that each survey will identify all of the animals in the survey region with probability one .
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Original:  Generally plot sampling assumes that on a given survey you will identify all of the animals in the survey region with probability one .
Revised:  Generally plot sampling assumes that on a given survey you will identify all of the animals in the survey region .
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Original:  From this, plots are selected from the entire survey region and sampled, an estimate can then be made using the Horvitz-Thompson estimator.
Revised:  From this, plots are selected from the entire survey region and sampled, an estimate can then be made using the Horvitz–Thompson estimator.
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Original:  From this, plots are selected from the entire survey region and sampled , an estimate can then be made using the Horvitz–Thompson estimator.
Revised:  From this, plots are selected from within a survey region and sampled , an estimate can then be made using the Horvitz–Thompson estimator.
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Original:  From this, plots are selected from the entire survey region and sampled , an estimate can then be made using the Horvitz–Thompson estimator.
Revised:  From this, plots are selected from the entire survey region and sampled ; population estimates can then be made using the Horvitz–Thompson estimator.
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Original:  This is a useful method if it is certain that all of the animals in the sample area will be sighted on a given survey
Revised:  This is a useful method if it can be assumed that each survey will identify all of the animals in the sample area will be sighted on a given survey
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Original:  This is a useful method if it is certain that all of the animals in the sample area will be sighted on a given survey
Revised:  This is a useful method if it is certain that all of the animals in the survey region
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Original:   An Interview with Chris Gonnerman , 3 Toadstools Publishing – October 7, 2016" At the time, the potential use of the Open Gaming License and d20 System Reference Document were being actively discussed as an avenue toward making clones of games no longer in print, but no one had yet succeeded.
Revised:  An Interview with Chris Gonnerman .3 Toadstools Publishing – October 7, 2016" At the time, the potential use of the Open Gaming License and d20 System Reference Document were being actively discussed as an avenue toward making clones of games no longer in print, but no one had yet succeeded.
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Original:  While created in its own right to emulate and improve upon the inspirational work of Tom Moldvay and David Cook, Basic Fantasy also derives inspiration from Gonnerman's earlier RPG, Project 74, RPGnet: REVIEW OF PROJECT 74.  Retrieved on 2008-08-09.
Revised:  While created in its own right to emulate and improve upon the inspirational work of Tom Moldvay and David Cook, Basic Fantasy also derives inspiration from Gonnerman's earlier RPG, Project 74, RPGnet: REVIEW OF PROJECT 74. RPGnet. Retrieved on 2008-08-09.
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Original:  The game is one of the very first products of the Old School Revival and has been positively received.
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Original: Supplements and Modules Basic Fantasy has amassed a dedicated community of artists, writers, editors and play-testers, and many accessories have been produced by volunteers, alone and in collaboration.
Revised: Supplements and modules Basic Fantasy has amassed a dedicated community of artists, writers, editors and play-testers, and many accessories have been produced by volunteers, alone and in collaboration.
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Original:  With the rules as written, it makes minor changes from its original 1981 inspiration in separating race from class, using the d20 ascending armor class scheme , and dispensing with alignment.
Revised:  With the rules as written, it makes minor changes from its original 1981 inspiration in separating race from class, using the d20 ascending armor class scheme and dispensing with alignment.
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Original:  However, it is fully expected that GMs will implement house rules to adapt the game to their own preferences, and the community website provides additional and alternate rules that can be added to the core game.
Revised:  However, it is expected that GMs will implement house rules to adapt the game to their own preferences, and the community website provides additional and alternate rules that can be added to the core game.
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Original: The Battle of Hamdh involved 5,000 Ikhwan bedouin fighters from the tribes of arabia outnumbering 2,000 cavalry Bedouin Tribes of Arabia fighting for the ruler of Al-Kout Fortress along side the Sheikhs of the House of Sabah.
Revised: The Battle of Hamdh involved 5,000 Ikhwan fighters and 2,000 cavalry Bedouin Tribes of Arabia fighting for the ruler of Al-Kout Fortress along side the Sheikhs of the House of Sabah.
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Original:  Kuwaiti Ministry of Defense, (Section Arabic Read الجيش الكويتي) See also Kuwait–Najd War Battle of Jahra Battle of Al-Regeai Military of Kuwait
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Original:  Kuwaiti Ministry of Defense, (Section Arabic Read الجيش الكويتي) See also Kuwait–Najd War Battle of Jahra Battle of Al-Regeai Military of Kuwait
Revised:  Kuwaiti Ministry of Defense, (Section Arabic Read الجيش الكويتي) See also Kuwait–Najd War Battle of Jahra Kuwait–Najd War
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Original: Taylor received an athletic scholarship to the University of Georgia, where she continued to play volleyball and basketball from 2005-2009.
Revised: Taylor received an athletic scholarship to the University of Georgia, where she continued to play volleyball and basketball from 2005 until 2009.
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Original: Early life Taylor was born on May 12, 1987  to Steve and Suzette Taylor.
Revised: Early life Taylor was born on May 12, 1987 , to Steve and Suzette Taylor.
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Original: Early life Taylor was born on May 12, 1987 , to Steve and Suzette Taylor.
Revised: Early life Taylor was born on May 12, 1987 to Steve and Suzette Taylor.
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Original:  While attending Centennial High School, Taylor had a successful four-year basketball career in which she received many accolades.
Revised:  While attending Centennial High School, she had a successful four-year basketball career in which she received many accolades.
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