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Original: Mahmud Kanti Bello (14 January 1945 – 29 August 2017) was a Nigerian senator who represented the People's Democratic Party in the Katsina North Senatorial District of Katsina State, and was the Senate majority whip.
Revised: Mahmud Kanti Bello (14 January 1945 – 29 August 2017) was Nigerian senator who represented the People's Democratic Party in the Katsina North Senatorial District of Katsina State, and was the Senate majority whip.
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Original:  He became a senator in 2003 and was reelected in 2007.
Revised:  He became senator in 2003 and was reelected in 2007.
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Original:  He became a senator in 2003 and was reelected in 2007.
Revised:  He became a senator in 2003 and was re-elected in 2007.
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Original:  He represented Daura Senatorial Zone between 2003 and 2007 and again from 2007 to 2011 and was the pioneer Managing Director of Katsina Steel Rolling Mill.
Revised:  He represented Daura Senatorial Zone between 2003 and 2007 and again from 2007 to 2011. He was the pioneer Managing Director of Katsina Steel Rolling Mill.
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Original: Career Katsina State in Nigeria Mahmud Kanti Bello was elected as a Katsina senator in 2003 on the All Nigeria Peoples Party (ANPP) platform .
Revised: Career Katsina State in Nigeria Mahmud Kanti Bello was elected senator during the 2003 on the All Nigeria Peoples Party (ANPP) platform .
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Original: Career Katsina State in Nigeria Mahmud Kanti Bello was elected as a Katsina senator in 2003 on the All Nigeria Peoples Party (ANPP) platform .
Revised: Career Katsina State in Nigeria Mahmud Kanti Bello was elected as a Katsina senator in 2003 on the All Nigeria Peoples Party (ANPP) in Katsina State .
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Original:  In the 2004 local elections  in his state, he protested strongly against electoral fraud which resulted in People's Democratic Party (PDP) candidates being returned.
Revised:  In the 2004 local elections held in his state, he protested strongly against electoral fraud which resulted in People's Democratic Party (PDP) candidates being returned.
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Original:  In the 2004 local elections  in his state, he protested strongly against electoral fraud which resulted in People's Democratic Party (PDP) candidates being returned.
Revised:  In the 2004 local elections in his state, which resulted in People's Democratic Party (PDP) candidates being returned.
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Original: Background Mahmud Kanti Bello was born on 14 January 1945, and is of Hausa origin.
Revised: Background Mahmud Kanti Bello was born on 14th of January 1945, and is of Hausa origin.
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Original: Background Mahmud Kanti Bello was born on 14th of January 1945, and is of Hausa origin.
Revised: Background Mahmud Kanti Bello was born on 14 January 1945, and is of Hausa origin.
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Original: Mahmud Kanti Bello (14 January 1945 – 29 August 2017) was Nigerian senator who represented the People's Democratic Party in the Katsina North Senatorial District of Katsina State,  and was the Senate majority whip.
Revised: Mahmud Kanti Bello (14 January 1945 – 29 August 2017) was Nigerian senator who represented Katsina North Senatorial District of Katsina State, and was the Senate majority whip.
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Original: Mahmud Kanti Bello (14 January 1945 – 29 August 2017) was Nigerian senator who represented the People's Democratic Party in the Katsina North Senatorial District of Katsina State,  and was the Senate majority whip.
Revised: Mahmud Kanti Bello (14 January 1945 – 29 August 2017) was Nigerian senator who represented the People's Democratic Party in the Katsina North Senatorial District of Katsina State, on the platform of People’s Democratic Party and was the Senate majority whip.
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Original:  He was determined, direct, forceful, impetuous in the field and in politics and, above all, a fervent believer in the white supremacist republican form of government for South Africa.
Revised:  He was determined, direct, forceful, impetuous in the field and in politics and, above all, a fervent believer in the republican form of government for South Africa.
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Original: Personal life On 10 June1903 he married Anna Emma Bodenstein, the daughter of a former landdrost of Krugersdorp, JC Bodenstein and his wife, MC Combrink.
Revised: Personal life On 10 June 1903 he married Anna Emma Bodenstein, the daughter of a former landdrost of Krugersdorp, JC Bodenstein and his wife, MC Combrink.
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Original: People from Gert Sibande District Municipality Category:Afrikaner people Category:South African Republic generals Category:National Party (South Africa) politicians Category:United Party (South Africa) politicians Category:Agriculture and land affairs ministers of South Africa Category:Government ministers of South Africa Category:Members of the House of Assembly of South Africa  Category:South African Republic military personnel of the Second Boer War Category:South African military personn
Revised: People from Gert Sibande District Municipality Category:Afrikaner people Category:South African Republic generals Category:National Party (South Africa) politicians Category:United Party (South Africa) politicians Category:Agriculture and land affairs ministers of South Africa Category:Government ministers of South Africa Category:Members of the House of Assembly of South Africa Category:South African Republic generals Category:South African Republic military personnel of the Second Boer War Category:South African military personn
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Original: At the outbreak of the Second Anglo-Boer War he joined the Krugersdorp commando .
Revised: At the outbreak of the Second Anglo-Boer War he joined the Krugersdorp Commando .
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Original:  Northern Cape Web Market When, as Minister of Lands, Kemp, was asked in 1936 to set aside a special reserve for the endangered Cape mountain zebra, he gave his now infamous reply: "No! They're just a lot of donkeys in football jerseys."
Revised:  When, as Minister of Lands, Kemp, was asked in 1936 to set aside a special reserve for the endangered Cape mountain zebra, he gave his now infamous reply: "No! They're just a lot of donkeys in football jerseys."
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Original:  some aslo suggested the Bisaya (Dusunic speaker) who established the early stage of Brunei Sultanate . Some sources indicate that this had occurred around 1365 CE after the ruler, Awang Alak Betatar, converted into Islam and became known as Muhammad Shah.
Revised:  some aslo suggested the Bisaya (Dusunic speaker) who established the early stage of Bruneian Empire . Some sources indicate that this had occurred around 1365 CE after the ruler, Awang Alak Betatar, converted into Islam and became known as Muhammad Shah.
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Original:  File:Brunei territories (1500).png|The extent of the Bruneian Empire in the 15th century, under Sultan Bolkiah rule.
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Original:  File:Sulu Sultanate 1822.svg|The extent of the Sultanate of Sulu in 1822.
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Original:  [[File: Flag of North Borneo (1902–1946).svg|Flag of the British North Borneo.
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Original:  File: Mount kinabalu.jpg|The first recorded ascent to the highest peak of Mount Kinabalu was made in 1851 by Hugh Low.
Revised:  Mount kinabalu.jpg|The first recorded ascent to the highest peak of Mount Kinabalu was made in 1851 by Hugh Low.
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Original:  File:Malaysian Border Scouts comprising indigenous peoples of Borneo .jpg|Men from the indigenous tribes of Sabah and Sarawak were recruited by the Malaysian government as Border Scouts under the command of Richard Noone and other officers from the Senoi Praaq to counter the Indonesian infiltrations.
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Original: PNG|Map of the British North Borneo with the yellow area covered the Philippine claim to eastern Sabah, presented by the Philippine Government to ICJ on 25 June 2001.]] The Philippines maintains a territorial claim over eastern Sabah (formerly known as North Borneo) based on an agreement signed in 1878 between the Sultan of Sulu and the North Borneo Chartered Company.
Revised: PNG|Map of the British North Borneo with the yellow area covered the Philippine claim to eastern Sabah, presented by the Philippine Government to the International Court of Justice on 25 June 2001.]] The Philippines maintains a territorial claim over eastern Sabah (formerly known as North Borneo) based on an agreement signed in 1878 between the Sultan of Sulu and the North Borneo Chartered Company.
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Original:  File:Flag of Sabah.svg|The official flag of the state of Sabah (1988–present).
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Original: In early 2013, an armed group who identified themselves as the "Royal Sulu Army" intrude Sabah with the purpose of reclaiming the eastern areas as part of the defunct-Sultanate of Sulu.
Revised: In early 2013, an armed group who identified themselves as the "Royal Sulu Army" intrude Sabah with the purpose of reclaiming the eastern areas as part of theSultanate of Sulu.
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Original:  The treaty granted Overbeck the right over  whole region of Sabah, including parts purporting to be the dominion of the Sulu Sultanate  including Sandakan and Tawau.
Revised:  The treaty granted Overbeck the right over the whole region of Sabah, including parts purporting to be the dominion of the Sulu Sultanate including Sandakan and Tawau.
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Original:  The treaty granted Overbeck the right over  whole region of Sabah, including parts purporting to be the dominion of the Sulu Sultanate  including Sandakan and Tawau.
Revised:  The treaty granted Overbeck the right over whole region of Sabah, including parts purporting to be the dominion of the Sulu Sultanate , including Sandakan and Tawau.
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Original:  The treaty granted Overbeck the right over the whole region of Sabah, including  parts purporting to be the dominion of the Sulu Sultanate, including Sandakan and Tawau.
Revised:  The treaty granted Overbeck the right over the whole region of Sabah, including the parts purporting to be the dominion of the Sulu Sultanate, including Sandakan and Tawau.
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Original:  The treaty granted Overbeck the right over the whole region of Sabah, including  parts purporting to be the dominion of the Sulu Sultanate, including Sandakan and Tawau.
Revised:  The treaty granted Overbeck the right over the whole region of Sabah, including parts purporting to be the dominion of the Sulu Sultanate, as well as Sandakan and Tawau.
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Original:  Cancer Foundation of India Senior Advocate Currently he practices in the Supreme Court of India and High Courts of India.
Revised:  Senior Advocate Currently he practices in the Supreme Court of India and High Courts of India.
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Original:  Debi Prasad Pal represents Vedanta Resources and Sterlite Group Member of Financial Sector Legislative Reforms Commission Dr. Pal has been recently appointed as a member of the newly constituted Financial Sector Legislative Reforms Commission (FSLRC).
Revised:  Member of Financial Sector Legislative Reforms Commission Dr. Pal has been recently appointed as a member of the newly constituted Financial Sector Legislative Reforms Commission (FSLRC).
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Original: Resolution Nofifying Constitution of Financial Sector Legislative Reforms Commission (FSLRC) IssuedTop bankers, regulators & legal experts to assist Sri Krishna in FSLRCFinancial sector bills to be rejiggedDebi Prasad Pal joins financial sector reforms panelGovt steps up to re-write and clean up financial-sector lawsFinancial Sector Legislative Reforms Commission (FSLRC)
Revised: Resolution Nofifying Constitution of Financial Sector Legislative Reforms Commission (FSLRC) IssuedTop bankers, regulators & legal experts to assist Sri Krishna in FSLRCFinancial sector bills to be rejiggedGovt steps up to re-write and clean up financial-sector lawsFinancial Sector Legislative Reforms Commission (FSLRC)
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Original:  Biographical Sketch on the Lok Sabha website He beat his political and legal guru Ashoke Kumar Sen by a huge margin.
Revised:  He beat his political and legal guru Ashoke Kumar Sen by a huge margin.
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Original: Presidency University, Kolkata alumni Category:Bengali people Category:20th-century Indian economists Category:20th-century Indian judges Category:20th-century Indian lawyers Category: Living people Category:9th Lok Sabha members Category:10th Lok Sabha members Category:11th Lok Sabha members Category:Members of the Cabinet of India Category:University of Calcutta alumni Category:Judges of the Calcutta High Court Category:Lok Sabha members from West Bengal Category:Politicians from Kolka
Revised: Presidency University, Kolkata alumni Category:Bengali people Category:20th-century Indian economists Category:20th-century Indian judges Category:20th-century Indian lawyers Category: Possibly living people Category:9th Lok Sabha members Category:10th Lok Sabha members Category:11th Lok Sabha members Category:Members of the Cabinet of India Category:University of Calcutta alumni Category:Judges of the Calcutta High Court Category:Lok Sabha members from West Bengal Category:Politicians from Kolka
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Original: Debi Prasad Pal is a Senior Advocate practicing in the Supreme Court of India and High Courts of India.
Revised: Debi Prasad Pal was a Senior Advocate practicing in the Supreme Court of India and High Courts of India.
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Original: Parliament of India Profile He is a former Minister of State for Finance, a former Judge of Calcutta High Court and a three-time former Member of Parliament (MP) in Lok Sabha.
Revised: Parliament of India Profile He was a former Minister of State for Finance, a former Judge of Calcutta High Court and a three-time former Member of Parliament (MP) in Lok Sabha.
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Original:  He is one of the founding members of Cancer Foundation of India.
Revised:  He was one of the founding members of Cancer Foundation of India.
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Original: Bengali people Category:20th-century Indian economists Category:20th-century Indian judges Category:20th-century Indian lawyers Category:Possibly living people Category:9th Lok Sabha members Category:10th Lok Sabha members Category:11th Lok Sabha members Category:Members of the Cabinet of India Category:University of Calcutta alumni Category:Judges of the Calcutta High Court Category:Lok Sabha members from West Bengal Category:Politicians from Kolka
Revised: Bengali people Category:20th-century Indian economists Category:20th-century Indian judges Category:20th-century Indian lawyers Category:9th Lok Sabha members Category:10th Lok Sabha members Category:11th Lok Sabha members Category:Members of the Cabinet of India Category:University of Calcutta alumni Category:Judges of the Calcutta High Court Category:Lok Sabha members from West Bengal Category:Politicians from Kolka
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Original: Nigel Hollis (born 1958) , is an author, analyst, researcher, speaker, and commentator on marketing.
Revised: Nigel Hollis (born 1958) is an author, analyst, researcher, speaker, and commentator on marketing.
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Original:   He is the author of The Global Brand: How to create and develop lasting brand value in the world market, published by Palgrave Macmillan in 2008.
Revised:  He is the author of The Global Brand: How to create and develop lasting brand value in the world marketThe Global Brand "
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Original:  The Global Brand In The Global Brand  , Hollis explains that while today many companies face a strong imperative to take their brands global, very few brands were developed with a world audience in mind.
Revised:  The Global Brand ", " The Global Brand , Hollis explains that while today many companies face a strong imperative to take their brands global, very few brands were developed with a world audience in mind.
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Original:  The book includes original research , case studies, and interviews with global branding practitioners . Hollis contribued a chapter to Martin Lindstrom's 2005 book BRAND Sense, in which Lindstrom described research that was designed by Hollis and conducted by Millward Brown specifically for the book.
Revised:  The book includes original research , case studies, and interviews with global branding practitioners . Hollis contributed a chapter to Martin Lindstrom's 2005 book BRAND Sense, in which Lindstrom described research that was designed by Hollis and conducted by Millward Brown specifically for the book.
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Original:  The HotWired Ad Effectiveness Study In conjunction with Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, Hollis designed and analyzed this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough . Hollis regularly publishes his thoughts on current issues in marketing on the blog "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" References Rex Briggs and Nigel Hollis, "Advertising on the Web: Is Ther Response Before Click-Through?"
Revised:  The HotWired ad effectiveness study In conjunction with Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, Hollis designed and analyzed this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough . Hollis regularly publishes his thoughts on current issues in marketing on the blog "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" References Rex Briggs and Nigel Hollis, "Advertising on the Web: Is Ther Response Before Click-Through?"
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Original:  The HotWired Ad Effectiveness Study In conjunction with Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, Hollis designed and analyzed this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough . Hollis regularly publishes his thoughts on current issues in marketing on the blog "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" References Rex Briggs and Nigel Hollis, "Advertising on the Web: Is Ther Response Before Click-Through?"
Revised:  The HotWired Ad Effectiveness Study Designed by Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, Hollis designed and analyzed this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough . Hollis regularly publishes his thoughts on current issues in marketing on the blog "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" References Rex Briggs and Nigel Hollis, "Advertising on the Web: Is Ther Response Before Click-Through?"
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Original:  The HotWired Ad Effectiveness Study In conjunction with Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, Hollis designed and analyzed this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough . Hollis regularly publishes his thoughts on current issues in marketing on the blog "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" References Rex Briggs and Nigel Hollis, "Advertising on the Web: Is Ther Response Before Click-Through?"
Revised:  The HotWired Ad Effectiveness Study In conjunction with Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, Hollis designed and analyzed this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough . Hollis regularly publishes a blog called "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" References Rex Briggs and Nigel Hollis, "Advertising on the Web: Is Ther Response Before Click-Through?"
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Original:  The HotWired Ad Effectiveness Study In conjunction with Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, Hollis designed and analyzed this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough . Hollis regularly publishes his thoughts on current issues in marketing on the blog "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" References Rex Briggs and Nigel Hollis, "Advertising on the Web: Is Ther Response Before Click-Through?"
Revised:  The HotWired Ad Effectiveness Study In conjunction with Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, Hollis designed and analyzed this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough . Hollis regularly publishes his thoughts on current issues in marketing on the blog "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" References Rex Briggs and Nigel Hollis, "Advertising on the Web: Is There Response Before Click-Through?"
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Original: Contributions to books by Martin Lindstrom The HotWired ad effectiveness study Designed by Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, with the technical support of HotWired staff including Joshua Grossnickle and Oliver Raskin, HotWired used some of Millward Brown measurement scales.
Revised: Book contributions The HotWired ad effectiveness study Designed by Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, with the technical support of HotWired staff including Joshua Grossnickle and Oliver Raskin, HotWired used some of Millward Brown measurement scales.
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Original: Contributions to books by Martin Lindstrom The HotWired ad effectiveness study Designed by Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, with the technical support of HotWired staff including Joshua Grossnickle and Oliver Raskin, HotWired used some of Millward Brown measurement scales.
Revised: Contributions to books by Martin Lindstrom HotWired ad effectiveness study Designed by Rex Briggs, then head of research at HotWired, with the technical support of HotWired staff including Joshua Grossnickle and Oliver Raskin, HotWired used some of Millward Brown measurement scales.
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Original:  Hollis was instrumental in getting HotWired to work with Millward Brown, and this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough is noted as the first study of its kind  Elliot, Stuart, Banner Ads On Internet Attract Users, Dec 3, 1996, New York Times Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis Hollis regularly publishes a blog called "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" 
Revised:  Hollis was instrumental in getting HotWired to work with Millward Brown, and this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough is noted as the first study of its kind . Elliot, Stuart, Banner Ads On Internet Attract Users, Dec 3, 1996, New York Times Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis Hollis regularly publishes a blog called "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" 
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Original:  Hollis was instrumental in getting HotWired to work with Millward Brown, and this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough is noted as the first study of its kind  Elliot, Stuart, Banner Ads On Internet Attract Users, Dec 3, 1996, New York Times Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis Hollis regularly publishes a blog called "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" 
Revised:  Hollis was instrumental in getting HotWired to work with Millward Brown, and this 1996 landmark study of online advertising, proving that banner ads could have a branding effect before clickthrough is noted as the first study of its kind Elliot, Stuart, Banner Ads On Internet Attract Users, Dec 3, 1996, New York Times Hollis regularly publishes a blog called "Straight Talk with Nigel Hollis" 
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