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Original: 250 Young Quakers will be organising an event, including floating candles on the lake at the University of York, to mark Hiroshima Day at 21.00 on 5th August2005 during the annual Quaker BYM  where over 1600 Quakers have been meeting.
Revised: Hundreds of floating candles will be launched by young Quakers to mark Hiroshima Day at 21.00 on 5th August2005 during the annual Quaker BYM where over 1600 Quakers have been meeting.
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Original:  The baby weighs 1 pound, 13 ounces, and is 13 and half inches long.
Revised:  The baby weighs 1 pound, 13 ounces, and is 13 1/2 inches long.
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Original:   It is not known if her life support is still there .
Revised:  It is not known if her life support is still in place .
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Original:  A fund for her is atSusan Torres Fund : The Susan M. Torres Fun
Revised:  A fund has been set up for her at : The Susan M. Torres Fun
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Original: A woman, Susan Torres, who has been on life support because she is brain-dead gave birth to a daughter, Susan Anne Catherine Torres, by Caesarean section on Tuesday.
Revised: A woman, Susan Torres, who had been on life support because she is brain-dead gave birth to a daughter, Susan Anne Catherine Torres, by Caesarean section on Tuesday.
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Original:  The mother died on Wednesday after being taken off life support.
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Original: A woman, Susan Torres,  who had been on life support because she is brain-dead gave birth to a daughter , Susan Anne Catherine Torres, by Caesarean section on Tuesday.
Revised:  Susan Torres, who had been on life support because she is brain-dead gave birth to a daughter , Susan Anne Catherine Torres, by Caesarean section on Tuesday.
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Original: A woman, Susan Torres,  who had been on life support because she is brain-dead gave birth to a daughter , Susan Anne Catherine Torres, by Caesarean section on Tuesday.
Revised: A woman, Susan Torres, who had been on life support because she is brain-dead gave birth to a daughter Caesarean section on Tuesday.
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Original:  She had a stroke on May 7 because the condition of her stage four melanoma went to her brain.
Revised:  She had a stroke on May 7 when the condition of her stage four melanoma went to her brain.
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Original: Susan Torres, a women who had been on life support because she is brain-dead  gave birth to a daughter by Caesarean section on Tuesday.
Revised: Susan Torres, a woman who had been on life support because she is brain-dead gave birth to a daughter by Caesarean section on Tuesday.
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Original: Susan Torres, a women who had been on life support because she is brain-dead  gave birth to a daughter by Caesarean section on Tuesday.
Revised: Susan Torres, a women who had been on life support because she is brain-dead , gave birth to a daughter by Caesarean section on Tuesday.
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Original:  He described the loans as being "a national and pressing necessity for us to formally ask our partners for the activation of the support mechanism, which we jointly created in the European Union."
Revised:  He stated that it is "a national and pressing necessity for us to formally ask our partners for the activation of the support mechanism, which we jointly created in the European Union."
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Original:  the move needs to be approved by all fifteen countries using the euro, and the request will be reviewed by the European Central Bank
Revised:  the request needs to be approved by all fifteen countries using the euro, and the request will be reviewed by the European Central Bank
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Original:  the move needs to be approved by all fifteen countries using the euro, and the request will be reviewed by the European Central Bank
Revised:  the move needs to be approved by all fifteen countries using the euro, and will be reviewed by the European Central Bank
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Original: "The moment has come," said Greek prime minister George Papaconstantinou .
Revised: "The moment has come," said Greek prime minister George Papandreou .
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Original: Under the plan, countries in the Eurozone will provide up to 30 billion euros in loans in the first year, while the IMF will contribute ten billion euros.
Revised: Under the plan, countries in the will provide up to 30 billion euros in loans in the first year, while the IMF will contribute ten billion euros.
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Original:  "The moment has come," said Greek prime minister George Papandreou .
Revised:  "The moment has come," said Greek prime minister .
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Original:  the deadliest attacks, meanwhile, were in Sadr City .
Revised:  the deadliest attacks, meanwhile, were in .
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Original:  Police say nobody has yet been arrested, although two of the suspect cars have been recovered  
Revised:  Police say nobody has yet been arrested, although two of the suspect cars have been recovered . 
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Original:  Be also assured, comrade president, of Zimbabwe's continuous support of Iran's just cause on the nuclear issue.    
Revised:  Be also assured, comrade president, of Zimbabwe's continuous support of Iran's just cause on the nuclear issue. " 
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Original: Mahmoud Ahmadinejad, the president of Iran, is visiting Zimbabwe to sign trade agreements with the country and meet with Zimbabwean President Robert Mugabe.
Revised: Mahmoud Ahmadinejad, the president of Iran, is visiting Zimbabwe to sign trade agreements with the country and meet with Zimbabwean president Robert Mugabe.
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Original:  The Iranian president remarked that Zimbabwe and Iran made a friendship based on a principled stand against Western interference, and he accused the West of seeking control over Zimbabwe’s natural resources.
Revised:  The Iranian president remarked that Zimbabwe and Iran made a friendship based on a principled stand against Western interference, and accused the West of seeking control over Zimbabwe’s natural resources.
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Original:  Iranian authorities, however, insist the programme is to be used only for peaceful purposes.
Revised:  Iranian authorities, however, insist the programme is only for peaceful purposes.
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Original: The law, widely regarded as the harshest measure against illegal immigration in the US,  would allow police to legally question and detain anyone if they have "reasonable suspicion" to do so, as well as as making the failure to carry immigration papers a crime.
Revised: Widely regarded as the harshest measure against illegal immigration in the US, would allow police to legally question and detain anyone if they have "reasonable suspicion" to do so, as well as as making the failure to carry immigration papers a crime.
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Original: In a move that has already ignited protests around the United States, Arizona governor Jan Brewer yesterday signed into law a bill that would severely crack down on immigration across the Mexican border.
Revised: In a move that has already ignited protests around the United States, Arizona governor Jan Brewer yesterday signed into law a bill that would crack down on immigration across the Mexican border.
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Original: Widely regarded as the harshest measure against illegal immigration in the US, the bill would allow police to legally question and detain anyone if they have "reasonable suspicion" to do so, as well as as making the failure to carry immigration papers a crime.
Revised: Widely regarded as the harshest measure against illegal immigration in the US, the bill would allow police to legally question and detain anyone if they have "reasonable suspicion" to do so, as well as making the failure to carry immigration papers a crime.
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Original: Zarein Ahmedzay plead guilty to conspiring to blow up subway trains in New York City along with two other men, in a plea entered in federal court in New York City.
Revised: Zarein Ahmedzay has pleaded guilty to conspiring to blow up subway trains in New York City along with two other men, in a plea entered in federal court in New York City.
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Original: Zarein Ahmedzay has pleaded guilty to conspiring to blow up subway trains in New York City along with two other men, in a plea entered in federal court in New York City .
Revised: Zarein Ahmedzay has pleaded guilty to conspiring to blow up subway trains in New York City along with two other men, in a plea entered in federal court in the city .
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Original:  He admitted to having flown to Pakistan in the summer of 2008 with two friends, one of whom has plead guilty, for training with Al-Qaeda , where they met Al-Qaeda leaders , and offered their assistance in fighting U.S. troops in Afghanistan.
Revised:  He admitted to having flown to Pakistan in the summer of 2008 with two friends, one of whom has plead guilty, for training with al-Qaeda , where they met Al-Qaeda leaders , and offered their assistance in fighting U.S. troops in Afghanistan.
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Original:  He admitted to having flown to Pakistan in the summer of 2008 with two friends, one of whom has plead guilty, for training with Al-Qaeda , where they met Al-Qaeda leaders , and offered their assistance in fighting U.S. troops in Afghanistan.
Revised:  He admitted to having flown to Pakistan in the summer of 2008 with two friends, one of whom has plead guilty, for training with Al-Qaeda , where they met al-Qaeda leaders and offered their assistance in fighting U.S. troops in Afghanistan.
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Original:  He admitted to having flown to Pakistan in the summer of 2008 with two friends, one of whom has plead guilty, for training with Al-Qaeda , where they met Al-Qaeda leaders , and offered their assistance in fighting U.S. troops in Afghanistan.
Revised:  He admitted to having flown to Pakistan in the summer of 2008 with two friends, one of whom has plead guilty, for training with Al-Qaeda , where they met Al-Qaeda leaders , and offered their assistance in fighting US troops in Afghanistan.
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Original:  The three men, Ahmedzay, Najibullah Zazi, and Adis Medunjanin  began planning their attack in time for Ramadan in September 2009, but their attack was foiled when Zazi's car was stopped entering New York City.
Revised:  The three men, Ahmedzay, Najibullah Zazi, and Adis Medunjanin , began planning their attack in time for Ramadan in September 2009, but their attack was foiled when Zazi's car was stopped entering New York City.
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Original:  While Admedzay's defense attorney, Michael Marinaccio  declined to comment on whether his client was cooperating with the investigation, he did say that by pleading guilty to the charges, " There  's a potential benefit to him."
Revised:  While Admedzay's defense attorney, Michael Marinaccio , declined to comment on whether his client was cooperating with the investigation, he did say that by pleading guilty to the charges, " There 's a potential benefit to him."
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Original:  While Admedzay's defense attorney, Michael Marinaccio  declined to comment on whether his client was cooperating with the investigation, he did say that by pleading guilty to the charges, " There  's a potential benefit to him."
Revised:  While Admedzay's defense attorney, Michael Marinaccio declined to comment on whether his client was cooperating with the investigation, he did say that by pleading guilty to the charges, " t 's a potential benefit to him."
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Original:  While Admedzay's defense attorney, Michael Marinaccio  declined to comment on whether his client was cooperating with the investigation, he did say that by pleading guilty to the charges, " There  's a potential benefit to him."
Revised:  While Admedzay's defense attorney, Michael Marinaccio declined to comment on whether his client was cooperating with the investigation, he did say that by pleading guilty to the charges, " There here 's a potential benefit to him."
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Original:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali, head of international operations for Al-Qaeda , and Rashid Rauf, a key operative, have both died in the past year in Waziristan
Revised:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali, head of international operations for al-Qaeda , and Rashid Rauf, a key operative, have both died in the past year in Waziristan
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Original: In a written statement, United States Attorney General Eric Holder said " the plot "makes clear we face a continued threat from al-Qaeda and its affiliates overseas.
Revised: In a written statement, United States Attorney General Eric Holder said the plot "makes clear we face a continued threat from al-Qaeda and its affiliates overseas.
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Original:  Zazi had been testing the bombs in Denver,  and was bringing them back to New York City.
Revised:  Zazi had been testing the bombs in Denver, Colorado and was bringing them back to New York City.
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Original:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali, head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and Rashid Rauf, a key operative, have both died in the past year in Waziristan
Revised:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali, head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and Rashid Rauf, a key operative, were both killed in the past year in Waziristan
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Original:  Zazi had been testing the bombs in Denver , Colorado and was bringing them back to New York City.
Revised:  Zazi had been testing the bombs in , Colorado and was bringing them back to New York City.
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Original:  In a written statement, United States Attorney General Eric Holder said the plot "makes clear we face a continued threat from al-Qaeda and its affiliates overseas.
Revised:  In a written statement, United States Attorney General said the plot "makes clear we face a continued threat from al-Qaeda and its affiliates overseas.
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Original:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali , head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and Rashid Rauf , a key operative, were both killed in the past year in the Waziristan region of Pakistan by drone attacks
Revised:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, , head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and Rashid Rauf , a key operative, were both killed in the past year in the Waziristan region of Pakistan by drone attacks
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Original:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali , head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and Rashid Rauf , a key operative, were both killed in the past year in the Waziristan region of Pakistan by drone attacks
Revised:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali , head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and , a key operative, were both killed in the past year in the Waziristan region of Pakistan by drone attacks
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Original:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali , head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and Rashid Rauf , a key operative, were both killed in the past year in the Waziristan region of Pakistan by drone attacks
Revised:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali , head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and Rashid Rauf , a key operative, were both killed in the past year in the region of Pakistan by drone attacks
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Original:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali , head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and Rashid Rauf , a key operative, were both killed in the past year in the Waziristan region of Pakistan by drone attacks
Revised:  The leaders who ordered them to plan the suicide-bombings, Saleh al-Somali , head of international operations for al-Qaeda, and Rashid Rauf , a key operative, were both killed in the past year in the Waziristan region of Pakistan by 
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Original:  A 13 year old giant panda  gave birth to two panda cubs but one died.
Revised:  A 13 year old giant panda , gave birth to two panda cubs but one died.
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Original:  The cub weighs 4 ounces and the gender of the cub will be unknown until the staff can safely check  
Revised:  The cub weighs 4 ounces and the gender of the cub will be unknown until the staff can safely check . 
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Original: A new giant panda cub is now at the San Diego Zoo.
Revised: A new giant panda cub has been born at the San Diego Zoo.
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Original: The cub weighs 4 ounces and the gender of the cub will be unknown until the staff can safely check.
Revised: The cub weighs 4 ounces and the gender of the cub will be unknown until zoo staff can safely check.
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Original:  The gender of the cub will be unknown until zoo staff can safely check.
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Original:  "It is likely that the second fetus died in utero and was reabsorbed by her body," Hall said  
Revised:  "It is likely that the second fetus died in utero and was reabsorbed by her body," Hall said . 
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Original: During the fire, which occurred in the town of Buxton at approximately 2245 UTC on Friday, a 23-year-old mother — identified as Fiona Adams — successfully escaped from the building via a window with a baby aged eight months , according to a statement made by a police spokesperson .
Revised: During the fire, which occurred in the town of Buxton at approximately 2245 UTC on Friday, a 23-year-old mother — identified as Fiona Adams — successfully escaped from the building via a window with a baby aged eight months .
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Original: Assistant Chief Constable Steve Cotterill has commented about how police were alerted to the area, which has now been cordoned off as examinations continue, after reports were made relating to nuisance and noise in the garden of the house;
Revised: Assistant Chief Constable Steve Cotterill stated that police attended the house, following reports of nuisance and noise in the garden of the house;
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Original:  He stated that the Independent Police Complaints Commission had had this incident referred to them , and that "[s]omeone on the estate may well know any particular intelligence that we're after, or information which may assist us in this case.
Revised:  He stated that the Independent Police Complaints Commission , and that "[s]omeone on the estate may well know any particular intelligence that we're after, or information which may assist us in this case.
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Original: During the fire, which occurred in the town of Buxton at approximately 2245 UTC on Friday, a 23-year-old mother — identified as Fiona Adams — successfully escaped from the building via a window with a baby aged eight months . Both mother and child are currently in a hospital, having suffered from severe burns.
Revised: During the fire, which occurred in the town of Buxton at approximately 2245 UTC on Friday, 23-year-old mother — identified as Fiona Adams — successfully escaped from the building via a window with a baby aged eight months . Both mother and child are currently in a hospital, having suffered from severe burns.
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Original: ]] Two children were killed in a "suspicious" house fire in w: Buxton, Derbyshire, England, on Friday evening.
Revised: ]] Two children were killed in a "suspicious" house fire in Buxton, Derbyshire, England, on Friday evening.
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Original: Image:EnglandDerbyshire.svg|Map of England with Derbyshire highlighted in red.
Revised: Image:EnglandDerbyshire.svg|Map of England with highlighted in red.
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Original: ]] Two children were killed in a "suspicious" house fire in Buxton, Derbyshire ,  England, on Friday evening.
Revised: ]] Two children were killed in a "suspicious" house fire in , England, on Friday evening.
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Original: ]] Two children were killed in a "suspicious" house fire in Buxton, Derbyshire ,  England, on Friday evening.
Revised: ]] Two children were killed in a "suspicious" house fire in Buxton, Derbyshire , , England, on Friday evening.
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Original:  The status of weddings conducted by the Evangelical Lutheran Church has not yet been determined.
Revised:  The future treatment of weddings by the Evangelical Lutheran Church has not yet been determined.
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Original:  The of has voted 105 to 92  to approve a citizen's initiative to legalise .
Revised:  The of has voted 105 to 92 today to approve a citizen's initiative to legalise .
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Original:  The of has voted 105 to 92 today to approve a citizen's initiative to legalise .
Revised:  The of has voted 105 to 92 today to approve a citizen's initiative to legalize .
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Original:  The of has voted 105 to 92 today to approve a citizen's initiative to legalize .
Revised:  The of has voted 105 to 92 today to approve a citizen's initiative to legalise .
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Original:  Soini suggested that if his party were to form the next government, it is unlikely that they would make same-sex marriage a priority.
Revised:  Soini suggested that if his party were to form the next government, it is unlikely they would make same-sex marriage a priority.
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Original: Stubb also noted the citizen's initiative process — a public petition that had garnered 160,000 signatures — that led to the law being considered by Parliament is "important" and "a demonstration of civic activism."
Revised: Stubb also noted the citizen's initiative process that led to the law being considered by Parliament is "important" and "a demonstration of civic activism."
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Original:  In contrast, Archbishop leader of the welcomed the change: "I know how much this day means to the rainbow community, their loved ones and many others.
Revised:  In contrast, Archbishop from the welcomed the change: "I know how much this day means to the rainbow community, their loved ones and many others.
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Original:  Now Finland is the 12th European country that will allow same-sex marriages, however this will most likely not take effect until 2016.
Revised:  Now Finland is the 12th European country that will allow same-sex 
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Original: One cent coin A Seattle man was ticketed for speeding so he decided to pay up  but instead of a cheque or money notes he decided to pay in pennies at the court.
Revised: One cent coin A Seattle man ticketed for speeding so he decided to pay up but instead of a cheque or money notes he decided to pay in pennies at the court.
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Original: One cent coin A Seattle man was ticketed for speeding so he decided to pay up  but instead of a cheque or money notes he decided to pay in pennies at the court.
Revised: One cent coin A Seattle man was ticketed for speeding decided to pay up but instead of a cheque or money notes he decided to pay in pennies at the court.
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Original: One cent coin A Seattle man was ticketed for speeding so he decided to pay up  but instead of a cheque or money notes he decided to pay in pennies at the court.
Revised: One cent coin A Seattle man was ticketed for speeding so he decided to pay up , but instead of a cheque or money notes he decided to pay in pennies at the court.
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Original: One cent coin A Seattle man was ticketed for speeding so he decided to pay up  but instead of a cheque or money notes he decided to pay in pennies at the court.
Revised: One cent coin A Seattle man was ticketed for speeding so he decided to pay up but instead of paying by cheque or money notes he decided to pay in pennies at the court.
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