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Original:  Another charge states that Abu Hamza was in possession of video and audio recordings which were going to be used to stir-up racial hatred .
Revised:  Another charge states that Abu Hamza was in possession of video and audio recordings with the intent to be used to stir-up racial hatred .
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Original:  Another charge states that Abu Hamza was in possession of video and audio recordings which were going to be used to stir-up racial hatred .
Revised:  Another charge states that Abu Hamza was in possession of video and audio recordings which were going to be used to stir-up racial hatred 
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Original:  The final charge , accuses him of the possession of the Encyclopedia of the Afghani Jihad, which, is said to have information "of a kind likely to be useful to a person committing or preparing an act of terrorism".
Revised:  , and a final charge of the possession of the Encyclopedia of the Afghani Jihad, which, is said to have information "of a kind likely to be useful to a person committing or preparing an act of terrorism".
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Original:  I actually condemned it," Abu Hamza|200px|Muslim Cleric Abu Hamza The cleric also denies that he was in possession of a document which could be considered to help in the preparation of terrorist attacks.
Revised:  I actually condemned it," The cleric also denies that he was in possession of a document which could be considered to help in the preparation of terrorist attacks.
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Original:  Wikimedia Deutschland complied but its lawyers announced that they will appeal the decision, saying that Tron's civil name was public knowledge for a long time .
Revised:  Wikimedia Deutschland complied but its lawyers announced that they will appeal the decision, saying that Tron's civil name was public knowledge for a long time 
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Original:  Wikinews is owned and operated by the Wikimedia Foundation
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Original: A district court in Berlin has issued a preliminary injunction against the Wikimedia Foundation, for displaying the true name (Boris Floricic) of a computer hacker on the German Wikipedia.
Revised: A district court in Berlin has issued a preliminary injunction against the Wikimedia Foundation, for displaying the true name of a computer hacker on the German Wikipedia.
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Original: A district court in Berlin has issued a preliminary injunction against the Wikimedia Foundation , for displaying the true name of a computer hacker on the German Wikipedia.
Revised: A district court in Berlin has issued a preliminary injunction against the Wikimedia Foundation for displaying the true name of a computer hacker on the German Wikipedia.
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Original:  The family of the deceased German hacker  known as "Tron  " obtained the provisional order in Berlin on December 14.
Revised:  The family of the deceased German hacker , known as "Tron " obtained the provisional order in Berlin on December 14.
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Original:  The family of the deceased German hacker  known as "Tron  " obtained the provisional order in Berlin on December 14.
Revised:  The family of the deceased German hacker known as "Tron , " obtained the provisional order in Berlin on December 14.
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Original:  The hacker Tron became famous when he was the first person to crack the encryption of Pay TV and calling cards.
Revised:  The hacker Tron became famous as the first person to crack the encryption of Pay TV and calling cards.
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Original: On January 17 the same court also issued a preliminary injunction against Wikimedia Deutschland e.V., the German chapter of the  Foundation, citing the same reasons.
Revised: On January 17 the same court also issued a preliminary injunction against Wikimedia Deutschland e.V., the German chapter of the Wikimedia Foundation, citing the same reasons.
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Original:  Wikimedia Deutschland complied  but its lawyers announced that they will appeal the decision, saying that Tron's civil name was public knowledgefor a long time
Revised:  Wikimedia Deutschland complied , but its lawyers announced that they will appeal the decision, saying that Tron's civil name was public knowledgefor a long time
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Original:  Wikimedia Deutschland complied  but its lawyers announced that they will appeal the decision, saying that Tron's civil name was public knowledgefor a long time
Revised:  Wikimedia Deutschland complied but its lawyers announced that they will appeal the decision, saying that Tron's civil name has long since been public knowledge
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Original:  The user died in 1998, at the age of 26, in an apparent suicide.
Revised:  He died in 1998, at the age of 26, in an apparent suicide.
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Original:  The court states that this is justified with the fact that the hacker never worked under his civil name, but instead his Internet alias.
Revised:  The court states that this is justified by the fact that the hacker never worked under his civil name, but instead his Internet alias.
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Original:  Meanwhile, , Michael Jackson's brother, believed that "[o]ne hundred years is not enough" for Murray.
Revised:  Meanwhile, , Michael Jackson's brother, said "[o]ne hundred years is not enough" for Murray.
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Original: The defence had requested that Murray be placed on probation as he would be serving "a lifetime  of self-punishment" . Ed Chernoff argued that Murray will be punished for the rest of his life for being "the man who killed Michael Jackson".
Revised: The defence had requested that Murray be placed on probation as he would be serving "a lifetime sentence of self-punishment" . Ed Chernoff argued that Murray will be punished for the rest of his life for being "the man who killed Michael Jackson".
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Original:  The judge refused to allow probation as he believed that Murray's actions were unsuitable for it
Revised:  The judge refused to allow probation , saying it wasn't justified by Murray's actions were unsuitable for it
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Original:  The judge refused to allow probation as he believed that Murray's actions were unsuitable for it
Revised:  The judge refused to allow probation as he believed that Murray's actions 
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Original: , the doctor of the deceased singer Michael Jackson, has been given a four year prison sentence by a judge in the US city of Los Angeles, California, based on a charge of , the maximum sentence he could receive for this offence .
Revised: , the doctor of the deceased singer Michael Jackson, has been given a four year prison sentence by a judge in the US city of Los Angeles, California, based on a charge of , the maximum sentence he could receive for this offense .
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Original:  Murray may also lose his licence to practice medicine.
Revised:  Murray may also lose his license to practice medicine.
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Original:  The defence had requested probation as Murray already faced "a lifetime sentence of self-punishment" and life-long reputation as "the man who killed Michael Jackson".
Revised:  The defense had requested probation as Murray already faced "a lifetime sentence of self-punishment" and life-long reputation as "the man who killed Michael Jackson".
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Original:  Steve Whitmore, a spokesperson for , informed that Murray would automatically have his sentenced reduced by half, to two years , under Assembly Bill 109.
Revised:  Steve Whitmore, a spokesperson for , told that Assembly Bill 109 would automatically halve the sentence to two years , under Assembly Bill 109.
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Original:  Steve Whitmore, a spokesperson for , informed that Murray would automatically have his sentenced reduced by half, to two years , under Assembly Bill 109.
Revised:  Steve Whitmore, a spokesperson for , informed that Murray would automatically have his sentenced reduced by half, to two years .
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Original:  Murray may also lose his license to practice medicine .
Revised:  Murray may also lose his medical license .
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Original:  Judge Michael Pastor condemned Dr. Murray's actions, saying that he had provoked a "continuous pattern of lies and deceit" and referred to him as a "danger to the community", having committed a "horrific violation of trust".
Revised:  Judge Michael Pastor condemned Dr. Murray's actions, calling his behavior a "continuous pattern of lies and deceit" and referred to him as a "danger to the community", having committed a "horrific violation of trust".
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Original:  Judge Michael Pastor condemned Dr. Murray's actions, saying that he had provoked a "continuous pattern of lies and deceit" and referred to him as a "danger to the community", having committed a "horrific violation of trust".
Revised:  Judge Michael Pastor condemned Dr. Murray's actions, saying that he had provoked a "continuous pattern of lies and deceit" and him a "danger to the community", having committed a "horrific violation of trust".
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Original:  Meanwhile, , Michael Jackson's brother, said "[o]ne hundred years is not enough" for Murray .
Revised:  Meanwhile, , Michael Jackson's brother, said "[o]ne hundred years is not enough" .
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Original:  Today saw 's First Minister, , reopen 's following a two-and-a-half-year, £17.6m (27.4m) refurbishment.
Revised:  Today saw 's reopen following a two-and-a-half-year, £17.6m (27.4m) refurbishment.
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Original:  The east corner holds the plaque unveiled today by First Minister Alex Salmond commemorating the gallery's reopening, next to a far more ornate memorial to John Ritchie Findlay, who not only funded and commissioned the building's construction, but masterminded all aspects of the then-new home for the national collection.
Revised:  The east corner holds a plaque commemorating the gallery's reopening, next to a far more ornate memorial to John Ritchie Findlay, who not only funded and commissioned the building's construction, but masterminded all aspects of the then-new home for the national collection.
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Original:  Today saw 's reopen following a two-and-a-half-year, £17.6m (27.4m or 22.5m ) refurbishment.
Revised:  Today saw 's reopen following a two-and-a-half-year, £17.6m (27.4m ) refurbishment.
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Original:  The study was conducted by the in Pennsylvania on 260 volunteers with an average age of 76 [ 
Revised:  The study was conducted by the in Pennsylvania on 260 volunteers with an average age of 76. [ 
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Original:  The study was conducted by the in Pennsylvania on 260 volunteers with an average age of 76 [ 
Revised:  The study was conducted by the in Pennsylvania on 260 volunteers with an average age of 76 [grilled 
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Original:  Dr. Corbett advised consumers to "eat a healthy diet including fruit and vegetables along with taking regular exercise and giving up smoking" to reduce the risk of contracting  
Revised:  Dr. Corbett advised consumers to "eat a healthy diet including fruit and vegetables along with taking regular exercise and giving up smoking" to reduce the risk of contracting . 
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Original: Consumption of grilled or baked fish at least once a week can significantly reduce the risk of developing by three to five times in comparison to those who do not , according to the results of a recent US study.
Revised: Consumption of grilled or baked fish at least once a week can significantly reduce the risk of developing by three to five times , according to the results of a recent US study.
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Original:  Tomorrow, the results are to be presented at an annual meeting of the .
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Original:  The study was conducted by the in Pennsylvania on 260 volunteers with an average age of 76, who were questioned about the frequency of their fish consumption.
Revised:  The study , conducted by the in Pennsylvania on 260 volunteers with an average age of 76, who were questioned about the frequency of their fish consumption.
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Original:  The study was conducted by the in Pennsylvania on 260 volunteers with an average age of 76, who were questioned about the frequency of their fish consumption.
Revised:  The study was conducted by the in Pennsylvania , asked 260 volunteers with an average age of 76, who were questioned about the frequency of their fish consumption.
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Original:  The study was conducted by the in Pennsylvania on 260 volunteers with an average age of 76, who were questioned about the frequency of their fish consumption.
Revised:  The study was conducted by the in Pennsylvania on 260 volunteers with an average age of 76, about the frequency of their fish consumption.
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Original:  Those who did regularly eat fish were found to have better preservation of parts of the brain related to memory.
Revised:  Those who regularly ate fish were found to have better preservation of parts of the brain related to memory.
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Original:  An additional five years afterwards , 31\% of those being observed who did not regularly consume fish contracted or Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  An additional five years later , 31\% of those being observed who did not regularly consume fish contracted or Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  An additional five years afterwards , 31\% of those being observed who did not regularly consume fish contracted or Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  An additional five years afterwards , 31\% of those who did not regularly consume fish contracted or Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increased the amount of being consumed , providing a greater amount of to the brain , therefore prompting a reduction in and internal gathering of plaques encountered in the approach to contracting Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increased the intake of , providing a greater amount of to the brain , therefore prompting a reduction in and internal gathering of plaques encountered in the approach to contracting Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increased the amount of being consumed , providing a greater amount of to the brain , therefore prompting a reduction in and internal gathering of plaques encountered in the approach to contracting Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increased the amount of being consumed , providing a greater amount of to the brain ; therefore prompting a reduction in and internal gathering of plaques encountered in the approach to contracting Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increased the amount of being consumed , providing a greater amount of to the brain , therefore prompting a reduction in and internal gathering of plaques encountered in the approach to contracting Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increased the amount of being consumed , providing a greater amount of to the brain , therefore prompting a reduction in and internal gathering of plaque encountered in the approach to contracting Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increased the amount of being consumed , providing a greater amount of to the brain , therefore prompting a reduction in and internal gathering of plaques encountered in the approach to contracting Alzheimer's disease.
Revised:  According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increased the amount of being consumed , providing a greater amount of to the brain , therefore prompting a reduction in and internal gathering of plaques encountered in the lead-up to Alzheimer's disease.
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Original:  It has also been established that consumption of fried fish does not reduce the risk of contracting Alzheimer's disease due to the low amount of Omega 3 it contains and therefore the lack of brain volume preservation and cognitive decline protection .
Revised:  Fried fish does not reduce the risk of contracting Alzheimer's disease due to the low amount of Omega 3 it contains and therefore the lack of brain volume preservation and cognitive decline protection .
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Original:  It has also been established that consumption of fried fish does not reduce the risk of contracting Alzheimer's disease due to the low amount of Omega 3 it contains and therefore the lack of brain volume preservation and cognitive decline protection .
Revised:  It has also been established that consumption of fried fish does not reduce the risk of contracting Alzheimer's disease due to the low amount of Omega 3 it contains .
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Original:  There is "a clear need for more conclusive research into the effects of dietary fish on our cognitive health," according to Dr. Ridley  
Revised:  There is "a clear need for more conclusive research into the effects of dietary fish on our cognitive health," according to Dr. Ridley . 
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Original: According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increased the intake of , providing a greater amount of to the brain;
Revised: According to , consumption of grilled or baked fish increases the intake of , providing a greater amount of to the brain;
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Original:  Police believe the dog was avoiding a car on the bridge, and accidently fell of of the bridge . Category:Michigan Category:United Stat
Revised:  Police believe the dog was avoiding a car on the bridge, and accidently fell of of the bridge Category:Michigan Category:United Stat
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Original:  Police believe the dog was avoiding a car on the bridge, and accidently fell of of the bridge . Category:Michigan Category:United Stat
Revised:  Police believe the dog was avoiding a car on the bridge, and accidently fell of of the bridge . 
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Original:  The 60-70 pound dog died after making the  16 feet fall.
Revised:  Police say that the 60 to 70 pound dog was not thrown off the overpass, but fell while running to avoid a vehicle. 16 feet fall.
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Original: A dog fell off a freeway overpass in w: Livonia, Michigan |Livonia, Michigan killing 81 year-old Charles G. Jetchick.
Revised: A dog fell off a w: Livonia, Michigan |Livonia, Michigan killing 81 year-old Charles G. Jetchick.
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Original: A dog fell off a freeway overpass in w: Livonia, Michigan |Livonia, Michigan killing 81 year-old Charles G. Jetchick.
Revised: A dog fell off a freeway overpass in w: Livonia, Michigan killing 81 year-old Charles G. Jetchick.
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Original:  A passenger in the car with Jetchick suffered only minor injuries . Police say that the 60 to 70 pound dog was not thrown off the overpass, but fell while running to avoid a vehicle.
Revised:  A passenger in the car with Jetchick suffered only minor injuries . Police say that the 60 to 70 pound dog was not thrown off the overpass, but fell while running to avoid a car," Shaw said. "We don't know and thats why we are looking for witnesses."
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Original:  The dog, which fell about 16 feet also died due to its injuries  
Revised:  The dog, which fell about 16 feet also died due to its injuries . 
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Original:  The power generation method has been approved by the United States Department of Energy for safety  
Revised:  The power generation method has been approved by the United States Department of Energy for safety . 
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Original:  The Wednesday launch was stopped after a severe storm near Laurel, Maryland, Maryland knocked out power at the Johns Hopkins University's Applied Physics Laboratory, which hosts the flight control center for the mission  
Revised:  The Wednesday launch was stopped after a severe storm near Laurel, Maryland, Maryland knocked out power at the Johns Hopkins University's Applied Physics Laboratory, which hosts the flight control center for the mission . 
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Original:  The Wednesday launch was stopped after a severe storm near Laurel, Maryland , Maryland knocked out power at the Johns Hopkins University's Applied Physics Laboratory, which hosts the flight control center for the mission.
Revised:  The Wednesday launch was stopped after a severe storm near Laurel, Maryland knocked out power at the Johns Hopkins University's Applied Physics Laboratory, which hosts the flight control center for the mission.
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Original:  The power generation method has been approved by the United States Department of Energy for safety.
Revised:  Some anti-nuclear ativists feared that the launch could end in an accident with radioactive material being spread over a wide area. The chances of such a disaster were calculated by the United States Department of Energy for safety.
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Original:  The Wednesday launch was stopped after a severe storm near Laurel, Maryland knocked out power at the Johns Hopkins University's Applied Physics Laboratory, which hosts the flight control center for the mission   .
Revised:  The Wednesday launch was stopped after a severe storm near Laurel, Maryland knocked out power at the Johns Hopkins University's Applied Physics Laboratory, which hosts the flight control center for the mission . .
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Original: New Horizons is powered by a onboard nuclear electric generator, known as a radioisotope thermoelectric generator, using 24 pounds (10.8kg) of plutonium as its radioactive "fuel" source.
Revised: New Horizons is powered by an onboard nuclear electric generator, known as a radioisotope thermoelectric generator, using 24 pounds (10.8kg) of plutonium as its radioactive "fuel" source.
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Original:  There were a couple of hundred people watching the vote and we made so much noise when the laws passed that we got in trouble.  
Revised:  There were a couple of hundred people watching the vote and we made so much noise when the laws passed that we got in trouble. " 
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Original: 250px The parliament of the Australian state of Queensland has passed a law recognising same-sex civil unions.
Revised: 250px The parliament of the state of has passed a law recognising same-sex civil unions.
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Original:  "The bill that is before the Parliament is a bill that seeks to strike a blow against prejudice and strike a blow against discrimination," Premier told parliament during debate.
Revised:  "The bill that is before the Parliament is a bill that seeks to strike a blow against prejudice and strike a blow against discrimination," Premier told during debate.
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Original:  The state now joins , , and the in officially recognising such relationships.
Revised:  , , and the in officially recognising such relationships.
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Original:  The state now joins , , and the in officially recognising such relationships.
Revised:  The state now joins , , and the already officially recognise such relationships.
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Original: While the governing Australian Labor Party allowed it's MPs a concience vote, the Liberal National Party voted en masse against the Bill.
Revised: While the governing Australian Labor Party allowed its MPs a conscience vote, the Liberal National Party voted en masse against the Bill.
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Original:  "The LNP will prioritise the issues for all Queenslanders, and civil partnership is not on the priority list in the minds of Queenslanders," shadow Atterny General Jarrod Bleijie said.
Revised:  "The LNP will prioritise the issues for all Queenslanders, and civil partnership is not on the priority list in the minds of Queenslanders," shadow Attorney General Jarrod Bleijie said.
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Original:  Sierra said he wanted to "one up Governor Johnson".
Revised:  Sierra said he would "one up Governor Johnson".
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