wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Its daughter node is added to the network and duplicates , with probability p, each one of the outgoing links of the mother node  .
Revised:  Its daughter node is added to the network and duplicates , with probability p, each one of the outgoing links of the mother node with probability p .
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Original:  Thus, the model is referred to as the corded directed-node-duplication (DND) model.
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Original:  We obtain analytical results for the in-degree distribution , P_t(K_{in}  ), and for the out-degree distribution , P_t(K_{out} ), of the network at time t.
Revised:  We obtain analytical results for the in-degree distribution P_t(K_{in} ), and for the out-degree distribution , P_t(K_{out} ), of the network at time t.
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Original:  We obtain analytical results for the in-degree distribution , P_t(K_{in}  ), and for the out-degree distribution , P_t(K_{out} ), of the network at time t.
Revised:  We obtain analytical results for the in-degree distribution , P_t(K_{in} ), and for the out-degree distribution P_t(K_{out} ), of the network at time t.
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Original:  It is found that the in-degrees follow a shifted power-law distribution , so the network is asymptotically scale free.
Revised:  The in-degrees follow a shifted power-law distribution , so the network is asymptotically scale free.
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Original:  It is found that the in-degrees follow a shifted power-law distribution , so the network is asymptotically scale free.
Revised:  It is found that the in-degrees follow a shifted power-law , so the network is asymptotically scale free.
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Original:  In contrast, the out-degree distribution is a narrowdistribution, that converges to a Poisson distribution in the sparse  limit and to a Gaussian distribution in the dense limit.
Revised:  In contrast, the out-degree distribution is narrow, and converges to a Poisson distribution in the sparse limit and to a Gaussian distribution in the dense limit.
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Original:  Using these distributions we calculate the mean degree , \langle K_{in}\rangle_t=\langle K_{out}\rangle_t .
Revised:  Using these distributions we calculate the mean degree \langle K_{in}\rangle_t=\langle K_{out}\rangle_t .
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Original:  To calculate the DSPL we derive a master equation for the time evolution of the probability P_t(L = \ell), \ell= 1 , 2 ,%DIFDELCMD < \dots%%% , that for two nodes, i and j, selected randomly at time t, the shortest path from i to j is of length \ell.
Revised:  To calculate the DSPL we derive a master equation for the time evolution of the probability P_t(L = 1 , 2 ,%DIFDELCMD < \dots%%% , that for two nodes, i and j, selected randomly at time t, the shortest path from i to j is of length \ell.
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Original:  To calculate the DSPL we derive a master equation for the time evolution of the probability P_t(L = \ell), \ell= 1 , 2 ,%DIFDELCMD < \dots%%% , that for two nodes, i and j, selected randomly at time t, the shortest path from i to j is of length \ell.
Revised:  To calculate the DSPL we derive a master equation for the time evolution of the probability P_t(L = \ell), \ell= 1 , 2 %DIFDELCMD < \dots%%% , that for two nodes, i and j, selected randomly at time t, the shortest path from i to j is of length \ell.
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Original:  The mean distance, <L>_t, is found to depend logarithmically on\langle }\rangle\langle }\rangle the network size, N_t, namely the corded DND network is a small-world network.
Revised:  The mean values\langle }\rangle\langle }\rangle the network size, N_t, namely the corded DND network is a small-world network.
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Original:  In this case, deep convolutional neural networks (deep ConvNets) could reach significantly higher ac curacies than both regularized Linear Discriminanat Analysis (rLDA) and filter bank common spatial patterns (FB-CSP) combined with rLDA.
Revised:  In this case, deep convolutional neural networks (deep ConvNets) could reach significantly higher accuracies than both regularized Linear Discriminanat Analysis (rLDA) and filter bank common spatial patterns (FB-CSP) combined with rLDA.
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Original:  Therefore, the existing memory-access reduction techniques, such as fusing multiple CONV layers, are not effective for accelerating BN due to their inability to optimize mini-batch related calculations  .
Revised:  Therefore, the existing memory access reduction techniques, such as fusing multiple CONV layers, are not effective for accelerating BN due to their inability to optimize mini-batch related calculations .
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Original:  Therefore, the existing memory-access reduction techniques, such as fusing multiple CONV layers, are not effective for accelerating BN due to their inability to optimize mini-batch related calculations  .
Revised:  Therefore, the existing memory-access reduction techniques, such as fusing multiple CONV layers, are not effective for accelerating BN due to their inability to optimize mini-batch related calculations during training .
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Original:  Interestingly, in non-varying heterogeneous environments, the long-term dynamics is the same as for symmetric interactions in an average, homogeneous environment.
Revised:  Interestingly, in non-varying heterogeneous environments, the long-term dynamics are the same as for symmetric interactions in an average, homogeneous environment.
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Original: Rationale: Heart muscle contraction is  activated by a synchronized systolic Ca release from sarcoplasmic reticulum (SR) via Ca sparks.
Revised:  Heart muscle contraction is activated by a synchronized systolic Ca release from sarcoplasmic reticulum (SR) via Ca sparks.
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Original: Rationale: Heart muscle contraction is  activated by a synchronized systolic Ca release from sarcoplasmic reticulum (SR) via Ca sparks.
Revised: Rationale: Heart muscle contraction is normally activated by a synchronized systolic Ca release from sarcoplasmic reticulum (SR) via Ca sparks.
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Original: Rationale: Heart muscle contraction is  activated by a synchronized systolic Ca release from sarcoplasmic reticulum (SR) via Ca sparks.
Revised: Rationale: Heart muscle contraction is activated by a synchronized Ca release from sarcoplasmic reticulum (SR) via Ca sparks.
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Original:  In disease, Ca sparks fail to terminate, causing a diastolic Ca leak that decreases contraction amplitude and increases the risk of arrhythmia.
Revised:  In disease, Ca sparks fail to terminate, causing a diastolic Ca leak that decreases contraction amplitude and increasing risk of life-threatening arrhythmia.
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Original:  After removing the effects of  environmental inputs, we find that different countries have reliably and substantially different  starting points in average HAZ scores even before considering environmental inputs (a range of 1.7 SD).
Revised:  After removing the effects of numerous environmental inputs, we find that different countries have reliably and substantially different starting points in average HAZ scores even before considering environmental inputs (a range of 1.7 SD).
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Original:  After removing the effects of  environmental inputs, we find that different countries have reliably and substantially different  starting points in average HAZ scores even before considering environmental inputs (a range of 1.7 SD).
Revised:  After removing the effects of environmental inputs, we find that different countries have reliably and substantially different starting points in average HAZ scores (a range of 1.7 SD).
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Original:  As expected from a two-component model, these country-specific starting points (basal HAZ) are not associated with key indicators of undernutrition (e.g., infant mortality and average calorie deficit).
Revised:  These country-specific starting points (basal HAZ) are not associated with key indicators of undernutrition (e.g., infant mortality and average calorie deficit).
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Original: Stunting, or impaired child growth due to undernutrition, has multiple negative health effects, making it a top global health priority.
Revised: Background: Stunting-or impaired child growth due to undernutrition, has multiple negative health effects, making it a top global health priority.
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Original: Stunting, or impaired child growth due to undernutrition, has multiple negative health effects, making it a top global health priority.
Revised: Stunting, or impaired child growth due to undernutrition-has multiple negative health effects, making it a top global health priority.
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Original:  We assess the potential magnitude of this bias by decomposing variation in HAZ from 1, 406,609 children from 63 low- and middle-income countries into two components ;
Revised:  We assess the potential magnitude of this bias by decomposing variation in HAZ from 1, 406,609 children from 63 countries into two components ;
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Original:  We assess the potential magnitude of this bias by decomposing variation in HAZ from 1, 406,609 children from 63 low- and middle-income countries into two components ;
Revised:  We assess the potential magnitude of this bias by decomposing variation in HAZ from 1, 406,609 children from 63 low- and middle-income countries into two components :
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Original:  1) a component shaped by environmental inputs, poverty, infectious disease, inadequate sanitation, and healthcare access, and 2) a country-specific basal starting point that is independent of such inputs.
Revised:  1) a component shaped by environmental inputs-undernutrition, infectious disease, inadequate sanitation, and healthcare access, and 2) a country-specific basal starting point that is independent of such inputs.
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Original:  1) a component shaped by environmental inputs, poverty, infectious disease, inadequate sanitation, and healthcare access, and 2) a country-specific basal starting point that is independent of such inputs.
Revised:  1) a component shaped by environmental inputs, poverty, infectious disease, inadequate sanitation, and 2) a country-specific basal starting point that is independent of such inputs.
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Original:  1) a component shaped by environmental inputs, poverty, infectious disease, inadequate sanitation, and healthcare access, and 2) a country-specific basal starting point that is independent of such inputs.
Revised:  1) a component shaped by environmental inputs, poverty, infectious disease, inadequate sanitation, and healthcare access, and 2) a country-specific "basal HAZ" independent of such inputs.
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Original:  By contrast, average increases in HAZ above a country's starting point, which we define as accrued HAZ , show strong correlations with these same variables, suggesting that low accrued HAZ captures standard definitions of stunting as impaired growth due to undernutrition.
Revised:  By contrast, accrued HAZ captures stunting as impaired growth due to undernutrition.
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Original:  As stunting is a high priority global health problem , standards that are sensitive to such population variation in healthy growth should improve efforts to target those most vulnerable to childhood undernutrition.
Revised:  As stunting is a high priority in global health , standards that are sensitive to such population variation in healthy growth should improve efforts to target those most vulnerable to childhood undernutrition.
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Original:  As stunting is a high priority global health problem , standards that are sensitive to such population variation in healthy growth should improve efforts to target those most vulnerable to childhood undernutrition.
Revised:  As stunting is a high priority global health problem , standards that are sensitive to population variation in healthy growth should improve efforts to target those most vulnerable to childhood undernutrition.
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Original:  Conclusion : Current universal cutoffs may miss stunting in populations with taller basal HAZ.
Revised:  Conclusion : Current universal standards may dramatically underestimate stunting in populations with taller basal HAZ.
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Original:  We are led to conclude that, despite the gradual weakening of ties among historians as mapped by references, new scholarship might be continually integrated through shared vocabularies and narratives.
Revised:  We speculate that, despite the gradual weakening of ties among historians as mapped by references, new scholarship might be continually integrated through shared vocabularies and narratives.
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Original:  This result strengthens our belief that citations are but one kind of bibliometric data -- perhaps even of secondary importance -- to consider when studying the humanities, while text should play a more prominent role.
Revised:  This would support our belief that citations are but one kind of bibliometric data -- perhaps even of secondary importance -- to consider when studying the humanities, while text should play a more prominent role.
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Original:  This result strengthens our belief that citations are but one kind of bibliometric data -- perhaps even of secondary importance -- to consider when studying the humanities, while text should play a more prominent role.
Revised:  This result strengthens our belief that citations are but one kind of bibliometric data to consider --- perhaps even of secondary importance -- to consider when studying the humanities, while text should play a more prominent role.
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Original:  This result strengthens our belief that citations are but one kind of bibliometric data -- perhaps even of secondary importance -- to consider when studying the humanities, while text should play a more prominent role.
Revised:  This result strengthens our belief that citations are but one kind of bibliometric data -- perhaps even of secondary importance --- when studying the humanities, while text should play a more prominent role.
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Original: In 2017, J. Nederlofproposed an algorithm [ \textit{Information Processing Letters , 118 (2017), 15-16] for constructing a proof that the number of subsets summing to a particular integer equals a claimed quantity .
Revised: We show that Nederlof's algorithm [ \textit{Information Processing Letters , 118 (2017), 15-16] for constructing a proof that the number of subsets summing to a particular integer equals a claimed quantity .
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Original: In 2017, J. Nederlofproposed an algorithm [ \textit{Information Processing Letters , 118 (2017), 15-16] for constructing a proof that the number of subsets summing to a particular integer equals a claimed quantity .
Revised: In 2017, J. Nederlofproposed an algorithm [ \textit{Information Processing Letters , 118 (2017), 15-16] for constructing a proof that the number of subsets summing to a particular integer equals a claimed quantity .
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Original:  We remark that the algorithm is flawed because: 1) it is not specified explicitly ;
Revised:  We remark that the algorithm is flawed because: 1) its consistence is not kept ;
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Original:  We provide rule formats for the specifications of NRTSs that ensure that the associated NRTS is an NTS and apply them to the operational specification of the early  pi-calculus.
Revised:  We provide rule formats for the specifications of NRTSs that ensure that the associated NRTS is an NTS and apply them to the operational specifications of the early pi-calculus.
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Original:   Our study stems from the recent Nominal SOS of Cimini et al. and from earlier works in nominal sets and nominal logic by Gabbay, Pitts and their collaborators.
Revised:  Our study stems from the Nominal SOS of Cimini et al. and from earlier works in nominal sets and nominal logic by Gabbay, Pitts and their collaborators.
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Original: In this paper, we explore how Integrated Information Theory of consciousness (IIT)  has evolved and what problems are involved in the theory.
Revised: The purpose of this article is to provide an overall critical appraisal of Integrated Information Theory of consciousness (IIT) has evolved and what problems are involved in the theory.
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Original: In this paper, we explore how Integrated Information Theory of consciousness (IIT)  has evolved and what problems are involved in the theory.
Revised: In this paper, we explore how Integrated Information Theory (IIT) has evolved and what problems are involved in the theory.
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Original: In this paper, we explore how Integrated Information Theory of consciousness (IIT)  has evolved and what problems are involved in the theory.
Revised: In this paper, we explore how Integrated Information Theory of consciousness (IIT) of consciousness. We explore how it has evolved and what problems are involved in the theory.
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Original:  In addition, as all hypotheses in the field of science of consciousness, IIT has given rise to several controversies and issues.
Revised:  In addition, like all hypotheses in the field of science of consciousness, IIT has given rise to several controversies and issues.
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Original:  The paper concludes by suggesting that, for the sake of future development, IIT should more seriously take metacognitive accessibility to experience.
Revised:  The article concludes by suggesting that, for the sake of future development, IIT should more seriously take metacognitive accessibility to experience.
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Original: Over the last 10 years, the Internet of Things has gain a great deal of attention and many papers have been written in this field .
Revised: Over the last 10 years, the Internet of Things (IoT) have grown exponentially .
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Original:  The aim of the IoT is to connect all things around us to the Internet and  provide us with smarter cities, smarter homes , and generally smarter lives.
Revised:  The aim of IoT devices is to connect all things around us to the Internet and provide us with smarter cities, smarter homes , and generally smarter lives.
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Original:  The aim of the IoT is to connect all things around us to the Internet and  provide us with smarter cities, smarter homes , and generally smarter lives.
Revised:  The aim of the IoT is to connect all things around us to the Internet and thus provide us with smarter cities, smarter homes , and generally smarter lives.
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Original:  One of the IoT challenges is addressing billions of things around the world including computers, tablets, smart phones, wearable devices, sensors and etc.
Revised:  One of the IoT challenges is addressing billions of devices (things) around the world including computers, tablets, smart phones, wearable devices, sensors and etc.
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Original:  One of the IoT challenges is addressing billions of things around the world including computers, tablets, smart phones, wearable devices, sensors and etc.
Revised:  One of the IoT challenges is addressing billions of things around the world , including: computers, tablets, smart phones, wearable devices, sensors and etc.
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Original: Over the last ten years , both research in and the real world application of Internet of Things (IoT)  have grown exponentially.
Revised: Over the last decade , both research in and the real world application of Internet of Things (IoT) have grown exponentially.
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Original: Over the last ten years , both research in and the real world application of Internet of Things (IoT)  have grown exponentially.
Revised: Over the last ten years , both research on the Internet of Things (IoT) have grown exponentially.
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Original:  The aim of IoT devices is to connect all things around us to the Internet and thus provide us with smarter cities, intelligent homes  and generally more comfortable lives.
Revised:  Internet of Things provides us with smarter cities, intelligent homes and generally more comfortable lives.
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Original:  The aim of IoT devices is to connect all things around us to the Internet and thus provide us with smarter cities, intelligent homes  and generally more comfortable lives.
Revised:  The aim of IoT devices is to connect all things around us to the Internet and thus provide us with smarter cities, intelligent homes , and generally more comfortable lives.
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Original:  Supporting these devices have led to several new challenges which must be addressed.
Revised:  Supporting these devices has led to several new challenges which must be addressed.
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Original:  Supporting these devices have led to several new challenges which must be addressed.
Revised:  Supporting these devices have led to several new challenges that must be addressed.
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Original:  One of the critical challenges facing interacting with IoT devices is addressing billions of devices (things) around the world, including : computers, tablets, smart phones , wearable devices, sensors  and embedded computers, etc.
Revised:  One of the critical challenges facing interacting with IoT devices is addressing billions of devices (things) around the world, including computers, tablets, smart phones , wearable devices, sensors and embedded computers, etc.
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Original:  One of the critical challenges facing interacting with IoT devices is addressing billions of devices (things) around the world, including : computers, tablets, smart phones , wearable devices, sensors  and embedded computers, etc.
Revised:  One of the critical challenges facing interacting with IoT devices is addressing billions of devices (things) around the world, including : computers, tablets, smartphones , wearable devices, sensors and embedded computers, etc.
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Original:  One of the critical challenges facing interacting with IoT devices is addressing billions of devices (things) around the world, including : computers, tablets, smart phones , wearable devices, sensors  and embedded computers, etc.
Revised:  One of the critical challenges facing interacting with IoT devices is addressing billions of devices (things) around the world, including : computers, tablets, smart phones , wearable devices, sensors , and embedded computers, etc.
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Original:  This paper comprehensively surveys addressing methods for IoT devices  including their advantages and disadvantages thereof.
Revised:  This paper comprehensively surveys addressing methods for IoT devices , including their advantages and disadvantages thereof.
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Original: Over the last decade, both research on the Internet of Things (IoT) and the real-world application of the IoT have grown exponentially.
Revised: Over the last decade, both research on the Internet of Things (IoT) and real-world application of the IoT have grown exponentially.
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Original: Over the last decade, both research on the Internet of Things (IoT) and the real-world application of the IoT have grown exponentially.
Revised: Over the last decade, both research on the Internet of Things (IoT) and the real-world IoT applications have grown exponentially.
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Original:  Internet of Things provides us with smarter cities, intelligent homes, and generally more comfortable lives.
Revised:  The IoT provides us with smarter cities, intelligent homes, and generally more comfortable lives.
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Original:  Supporting these devices has led to several new challenges that must be addressed.
Revised:  However, the introduction of these devices has led to several new challenges that must be addressed.
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