wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: A Danny Kelleher A Thomas Cosh A serial rapist is someone who commits multiple rapes, whether with multiple victims or a single victim repeatedly over a period of time.
Revised: A Danny Kelleher A serial rapist is someone who commits multiple rapes, whether with multiple victims or a single victim repeatedly over a period of time.
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Original: A Danny Kelleher A serial rapist is someone who commits multiple rapes, whether with multiple victims or a single victim repeatedly over a period of time.
Revised: A serial rapist is someone who commits multiple rapes, whether with multiple victims or a single victim repeatedly over a period of time.
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Original: A serial rapist is someone who commits multiple rapes, whether with multiple victims or a single victim repeatedly over a period of time. such as Gino Derwig, he is one.
Revised: A serial rapist is someone who commits multiple rapes, whether with multiple victims or a single victim repeatedly over a period of time. 
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Original: Personal life Bunga Citra Lestari's name is translated as " perpetual image of a flower ".
Revised: Personal life Bunga Citra Lestari's name is translated as " flower with an everlasting image ".
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Original:  Hydrothermal vents are entire ecosystems independent from sunlight, and may be the first evidence that the earth can support life without the sun .
Revised:  Hydrothermal vents are entire ecosystems independent from sunlight, and may be the first evidence that Earth can support life without the sun .
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Original:  Hydrothermal vents are entire ecosystems independent from sunlight, and may be the first evidence that the earth can support life without the sun .
Revised:  Hydrothermal vents are entire ecosystems independent from sunlight, and may be the first evidence that the earth can support life without the Sun .
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Original: ]] The bathyl zone is the lower section of the midwater zone, and encompasses the depths of 1000 to 3000 meters . Light does not reach this zone, giving it its nickname "the midnight zone";
Revised: ]] The bathyl zone is the lower section of the midwater zone, and encompasses the depths of . Light does not reach this zone, giving it its nickname "the midnight zone";
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Original:  The abyssal zone remains in perpetual darkness at a depth of 3000 το 6000 meters .
Revised:  The abyssal zone remains in perpetual darkness at a depth of .
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Original:  Hydrothermal vents are entire ecosystems independent from sunlight, and may be the first evidence that Earth can support life without the Sun .
Revised:  Hydrothermal vents are entire ecosystems independent from sunlight, and may be the first evidence that the earth can support life without the Sun .
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Original:  Hydrothermal vents are entire ecosystems independent from sunlight, and may be the first evidence that Earth can support life without the Sun .
Revised:  Hydrothermal vents are entire ecosystems independent from sunlight, and may be the first evidence that Earth can support life without the sun .
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Original:  Since the 19th century however, research has demonstrated that there is actually significant biodiversity that exists in the deep sea.
Revised:  Since the 19th century however, research has demonstrated that significant biodiversity exists in the deep sea.
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Original:  Since the longer, red  wavelengths of light do not reach the deep sea, red effectively functions the same as black.
Revised:  Since the longer, red , wavelengths of light do not reach the deep sea, red effectively functions the same as black.
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Original: ]] The bathyl zone is the lower section of the midwater zone, and encompasses the depths of . Light does not reach this zone, giving it its nickname "the midnight zone" . Due to the lack of light, it is less densely populated than the epipelagic zone, despite being much larger.
Revised: ]] The bathyl zone is the lower section of the midwater zone, and encompasses the depths of . Light does not reach this zone, giving it its nickname "the midnight zone" ; due to the lack of light, it is less densely populated than the epipelagic zone, despite being much larger.
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Original: ]] The bathyl zone is the lower section of the midwater zone, and encompasses the depths of . Light does not reach this zone, giving it its nickname "the midnight zone" . Due to the lack of light, it is less densely populated than the epipelagic zone, despite being much larger.
Revised: ]] The bathyl zone is the lower section of the midwater zone, and encompasses the depths of . Light does not reach this zone, giving it its nickname "the midnight zone" . Due to the lack of light, it is less densely population than the epipelagic zone, despite being much larger.
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Original:  Most of the animals that live in the bathyl zone are invertebrates , such as sea sponges, cephalopods, and echinoderms.
Revised:  Most of the animals that live in the bathyl zone are invertebrates such as sea sponges, cephalopods, and echinoderms.
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Original:  The only organisms that inhabit this zone are chemotrophs and predators that can withstand the immense pressures, sometimes as high as .
Revised:  The only organisms that inhabit this zone are chemotrophs and predators that can withstand immense pressures, sometimes as high as .
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Original:  It is a living breathing collection of organisms that are evolving every second-a 'self-organizing, complex, adaptive system'.
Revised:  It is a living breathing collection of organisms that are evolving every second---a 'self-organizing, complex, adaptive system'.
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Original: To quote Dr. Sallie Chisholm "Proponents of research on geoengineering simply keep ignoring the fact that the biosphere is a player in what ever we do, and its trajectory cannont be predicted.
Revised: To quote Dr. Sallie Chisholm "Proponents of research on geoengineering simply keep ignoring the fact that the biosphere is a player in what ever we do, and its trajectory can not be predicted.
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Original:  An emerging bio-geoengineering thesis, the Intergovernmental Marine Bio-Energy with Carbon Sequestration (IMBECS) Protocol, is an attempt to create vast scale marine biomass cultivation operations within the oceanic gyres, which, in turn, will capture, convert and store vast amount carbon.
Revised:  An emerging bio-geoengineering thesis, the Intergovernmental Marine Bio-Energy with Carbon Sequestration (IMBECS) Protocol, is an attempt to create vast scale marine biomass cultivation operations within the oceanic gyres, which, in turn, will capture, convert and store vast amounts of carbon.
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Original: Bio-geoengineering is a form of climate engineering which seeks to use or modify plants or other living things to modify the Earth's URL Biogenic aerosols can be grown to replace those beneficial aerosols lost as the result of the death of 50\% of Earth's boreal forests.
Revised: Bio-geoengineering is a form of climate engineering which seeks to use or modify plants or other living things to modify the Earth's climate. Biogenic aerosols can be grown to replace those beneficial aerosols lost as the result of the death of 50\% of Earth's boreal forests.
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Original:  Agricultural production of atmospheric aerosols called "monoterpenes" is possible if crops that are rich in monoterpenes are URL
Revised:  Agricultural production of atmospheric aerosols called "monoterpenes" is possible if crops that are rich in monoterpenes are grown.
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Original:  The liquified CO2 is then siphoned into underground aquifers for long haul URL
Revised:  The liquified CO2 is then siphoned into underground aquifers for long haul storage.
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Original: Bio-geoengineering solutions to climate change Carbon Capture and storage.
Revised: Bio-geoengineering solutions to climate change Carbon capture and storage.
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Original:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” "  Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
Revised:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian actor and male model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” " Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
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Original:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” "  Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
Revised:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” " Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
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Original:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” "  Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
Revised:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti " Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
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Original:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” "  Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
Revised:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” " " Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
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Original:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” "  Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
Revised:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” " Kembali ke Sekolah " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
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Original:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” "  Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
Revised:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” " Kembali ke Sekolah ” " "Balon Udaraku" 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
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Original:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” "  Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan ” 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
Revised:  On November 3, 2020, Sherina married with the Indonesian Actor and Male Model , Baskara Mahendra (Baskara Mahendra） . Music Video Year Title Album 1999 "Pelangiku" Andai Aku Besar Nanti "Andai Aku Besar Nanti ” " Kembali ke Sekolah ” " Balon Udaraku” 2000 "Lihatlah Lebih Dekat" OST. Petualangan Sherina "Jagoan " 2001 "I Have a Dream" feat.
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Original:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
Revised:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia " 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
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Original:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
Revised:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock " 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
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Original:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
Revised:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
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Original:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
Revised:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " "Jalan Cinta" OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
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Original:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
Revised:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
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Original:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " Pergilah Kau” 2011 "Ayo!
Revised:  Westlife UNICEF Fundraising 2002 "Simfoni Raya Indonesia ” 100 Tahun Bung Karno: Penyambung Lidah Rakyat "My Life" My Life "Click-Clock ” 2005 "Indonesia Menangis" Indonesia Menangis (Tsunami Aceh 2004) 2007 "Sendiri" Primadona "Ku di Sini ” " Jalan Cinta” OST. Ayat-ayat Cinta 2008 "Ku Bahagia" OST. Laskar Pelangi 2009 "Cinta Pertama dan Terakhir" Gemini 2010 "Geregetan ” " "Pergilah Kau" 2011 "Ayo!
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Original:  Indonesia Bisa ” feat.
Revised:  Indonesia Bisa " feat.
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Original:  Ello Official Song 26th Sea Games in Indonesia 2013 "Akan Ku Tunggu" Tuna "Sebelum Selamanya ” "Apakah Ku Jatuh Cinta" feat.
Revised:  Ello Official Song 26th Sea Games in Indonesia 2013 "Akan Ku Tunggu" Tuna "Sebelum Selamanya " "Apakah Ku Jatuh Cinta" feat.
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Original:  1990–2001: The beginnings and Petualangan Sherina Sinna Sherina Munaf was born on 11 June 1990, the second child of Triawan Munaf and Luki Ariani.
Revised:  Sinna Sherina Munaf was born on 11 June 1990, the second child of Triawan Munaf and Luki Ariani.
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Original: Minangkabau people Category:Sundanese people Category:Indonesian people of Yemeni descent Category:Living people Category: Indonesian-language singers Category: Indonesian child singers Category:  Indonesian women singers Category:Indonesian pop singers Category:Anugerah Musik Indonesia winners Category:People from Bandung Category:Actresses from West Java Category:Musicians from West Java Category:Indonesian child actresses Category:21st-century women singe
Revised: Minangkabau people Category:Sundanese people Category:Indonesian people of Yemeni descent Category:Living people Category: Indonesian child singers Category: Indonesian women singers Category:Indonesian pop singers Category:Anugerah Musik Indonesia winners Category:People from Bandung Category:Actresses from West Java Category:Musicians from West Java Category:Indonesian child actresses Category:21st-century women singe
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Original: Minangkabau people Category:Sundanese people Category:Indonesian people of Yemeni descent Category:Living people Category: Indonesian-language singers Category: Indonesian child singers Category:  Indonesian women singers Category:Indonesian pop singers Category:Anugerah Musik Indonesia winners Category:People from Bandung Category:Actresses from West Java Category:Musicians from West Java Category:Indonesian child actresses Category:21st-century women singe
Revised: Minangkabau people Category:Sundanese people Category:Indonesian people of Yemeni descent Category:Living people Category: Indonesian-language singers Category: Indonesian child singers Category: 21st-century Indonesian women singers Category:Indonesian pop singers Category:Anugerah Musik Indonesia winners Category:People from Bandung Category:Actresses from West Java Category:Musicians from West Java Category:Indonesian child actresses Category:21st-century women singe
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Original: Minangkabau people Category:Sundanese people Category:Indonesian people of Yemeni descent Category:Living people Category: Indonesian-language singers Category: Indonesian child singers Category:  Indonesian women singers Category:Indonesian pop singers Category:Anugerah Musik Indonesia winners Category:People from Bandung Category:Actresses from West Java Category:Musicians from West Java Category:Indonesian child actresses Category:21st-century women singe
Revised: Minangkabau people Category:Sundanese people Category:Indonesian people of Yemeni descent Category:Living people Category: Indonesian-language singers Category: Indonesian child singers Category: Indonesian women singers Category:Indonesian pop singers Category:Anugerah Musik Indonesia winners Category:People from Bandung Category:Actresses from West Java Category:Musicians from West Java Category:Indonesian child actress
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Original:  He is depicted as a shipping tycoon with underworld connections .
Revised:  This version is a shipping tycoon with underworld connections .
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Original:  He carries a metal rod in the shape of a thunderbolt (shown in the picture at right) , which he uses to shock his victims into unconsciousness.
Revised:  He carries a metal rod in the shape of a thunderbolt , which he uses to shock his victims into unconsciousness.
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Original:  In his debut episode "Fire From Olympus", he loses his mind after recovering from a serious financial crisis and faces a criminal conviction for smuggling .
Revised:  After recovering from a serious financial crisis and faces a criminal conviction for smuggling .
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Original:  In his debut episode "Fire From Olympus", he loses his mind after recovering from a serious financial crisis and faces a criminal conviction for smuggling .
Revised:  In his debut episode "Fire From Olympus", he loses his mind after recovering from a serious financial crisis and facing a criminal conviction for smuggling .
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Original:  The stress of dealing with these causes him to develop a god complex and he starts to believe that he is the Greek god Zeus , and that his girlfriend is the muse Clio .
Revised:  The stress of dealing with these causes him to develop a god complex , and starts to believe that he is the Greek god Zeus , and that his girlfriend is the muse Clio .
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Original:  The stress of dealing with these causes him to develop a god complex and he starts to believe that he is the Greek god Zeus , and that his girlfriend is the muse Clio .
Revised:  The stress of dealing with these causes him to develop a god complex and he starts to believe that he is the Greek god Zeus ; even seeing his girlfriend as the muse Clio .
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Original:  When Clio tries to stop him and bring him back to his senses, he has his henchmen tie her to the barrel of the cannon, though she is saved by Batman before she can be killed.
Revised:  When "Clio" attempts to stop him and bring him back to his senses, he has his henchmen tie her to the barrel of the cannon, though she is saved by Batman before she can be killed.
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