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Original:  Gary Sheffield then responded in the bottom of the inning with a three-run homer hit deep into the right-centerfield bleachers, stretching the Yankee lead to 9-4.
Revised:  Gary Sheffield then responded in the bottom of the inning with a three-run homer hit deep into the right-center field bleachers, stretching the Yankee lead to 9-4.
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Original:  Also stated by ABC news is that the people killed are intelligence operatives.
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Original: A suicide bomber attacked a American base in the Khowst region on the Pakistani border of Afghanistan  leaving 8 American civilians dead and an undisclosed number injured.
Revised: A suicide bomber attacked an American base in the Khowst region on the Pakistani border of Afghanistan leaving 8 American civilians dead and an undisclosed number injured.
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Original: A suicide bomber attacked a American base in the Khowst region on the Pakistani border of Afghanistan  leaving 8 American civilians dead and an undisclosed number injured.
Revised: A suicide bomber attacked a American base in the Khowst region on the Pakistani border of Afghanistan , leaving 8 American civilians dead and an undisclosed number injured.
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Original: According to ABC News it appears that the suicide bomber blew them self up in either  gym or the dining facility of Base Chapman.
Revised: It appears that the suicide bomber blew them self up in either gym or the dining facility of Base Chapman.
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Original: According to ABC News it appears that the suicide bomber blew them self up in either  gym or the dining facility of Base Chapman.
Revised: According to ABC News it appears that the suicide bomber blew himself up in either gym or the dining facility of Base Chapman.
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Original: According to ABC News it appears that the suicide bomber blew them self up in either  gym or the dining facility of Base Chapman.
Revised: According to ABC News it appears that the suicide bomber blew them self up in either the gym or the dining facility of Base Chapman.
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Original:  Camp Salerno  the main base in the Khowst province  has been the target of many attacks in recent weeks.
Revised:  Camp Salerno , the main base in the Khowst province has been the target of many attacks in recent weeks.
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Original:  Camp Salerno  the main base in the Khowst province  has been the target of many attacks in recent weeks.
Revised:  Camp Salerno the main base in the Khowst province , has been the target of many attacks in recent weeks.
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Original:  Recent attacks have been focused on foreign civilians, such as an incident in October in which 7 foreign and 3 Afghani civilians were killed in an attack on UN guest house.
Revised:  Recent attacks have been focused on foreign civilians, such as an incident in October in which 7 foreign and 3 Afghani civilians were killed in an attack at a UN guest house.
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Original:  The CIA has not lost this many operatives in nearly 25-years .
Revised:  The CIA has not lost this many operatives in nearly 25 years .
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Original:  It appears that the suicide bomber  blew himself up in either the gym or the dining facility of Base Chapman   .
Revised:  It appears that the suicide bomber blew himself up in either the gym or the dining facility of Base Chapman . .
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Original:  Lang is the first Canadian journalist to lose their life in the conflict, with seven journalists from other countries also having died.
Revised:  Lang is the first Canadian journalist to die in the conflict, with seven journalists from other countries also having died.
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Original: A lone gunman dressed in black opened fire in a Finnish shopping mall , in Espoo, near the capital , Helsinki.
Revised: A lone gunman dressed in black opened fire in a Finnish shopping mall in the city of Espoo, near the capital , Helsinki.
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Original: A lone gunman dressed in black opened fire in a Finnish shopping mall , in Espoo, near the capital , Helsinki.
Revised: A lone gunman dressed in black opened fire in a Finnish shopping mall , in Espoo, near the capital Helsinki.
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Original:  Four people have been confirmed dead in this incident, while others have been injured.
Revised:  Four people have been confirmed dead following the incident, and others have been injured.
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Original:  In September 2008, a gunman killed 9 students as well as a teacher before committing suicide, while in November 2007, another student killed 8 , and ultimately shot himself dead
Revised:  In September 2008, a gunman killed nine students as well as a teacher before committing suicide, while in November 2007, another student killed 8 , and ultimately shot himself dead
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Original:  In September 2008, a gunman killed 9 students as well as a teacher before committing suicide, while in November 2007, another student killed 8 , and ultimately shot himself dead
Revised:  In September 2008, a gunman killed 9 students as well as a teacher before committing suicide, while in November 2007, another student killed eight , and ultimately shot himself dead
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Original:  Four people have been confirmed dead following the incident, and others have been injured.
Revised:  Five people have been confirmed dead following the incident, and others have been injured.
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Original:  " Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Disasters and accidents Category:London Category:Israel Category:Palestine 2005-07-
Revised:  Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Disasters and accidents Category:London Category:Israel Category:Palestine 2005-07-
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Original:  " Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Disasters and accidents Category:London Category:Israel Category:Palestine 2005-07-
Revised:  " %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Disasters and accidents Category:London Category:Israel Category:Palestine 2005-07-
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Original: North Korea said in a statement today that it wants to end it's “hostile relationship” with the United States, and that it seeks to focus on the six-party talks with the west.
Revised: North Korea said in a statement today that it wants to end it's “hostile relationship” with the United States, and that it seeks to focus on six-party talks with the west.
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Original:  The statement released by major state run news outlets, saying that the North is committed to "a lasting peace system on the Korean peninsula."
Revised:  The statement released by major state run news outlets, said that the North is committed to "a lasting peace system on the Korean peninsula."
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Original:  North Korea has been hit with sanctions since its nuclear test in May of 2009, the sanctions hurt the Norths already struggling economy.
Revised:  North Korea has been hit with sanctions since its nuclear test in May of 2009, the sanctions hurt the North's already struggling economy.
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Original: North Korea said in a statement today that it wants to end it's “hostile relationship” with the United States, and that it seeks to focus on six-party talks with the west.
Revised: North Korea said in a statement today that it wants to end its “hostile relationship” with the United States, and that it seeks to focus on six-party talks with the west.
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Original:  An expert on North Korean- US relations B.R. Myers from Dongseo University said, "North has absolutely no interest in normalizing relations with the United States.
Revised:  An expert on North Korean-US relations, B.R. Myers from Dongseo University said, "North has absolutely no interest in normalizing relations with the United States.
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Original:  An expert on North Korean- US relations B.R. Myers from Dongseo University said, "North has absolutely no interest in normalizing relations with the United States.
Revised:  An expert on North Korean- US relations B.R. Myers from Dongseo University , said that "North has absolutely no interest in normalizing relations with the United States.
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Original:  As soon as the North does that, it loses all reason to exist,  as soon as people think it is possible to get along with America, they will ask themselves why they need a 'military first' policy."
Revised:  As soon as the North does that, it loses all reason to exist, " and " as soon as people think it is possible to get along with America, they will ask themselves why they need a 'military first' policy."
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Original: North Korea said in a statement  Friday that it wants to end its “hostile relationship” with the United States, and that it seeks to focus on six-party talks with the west.
Revised: North Korea said in a statement on Friday that it wants to end its “hostile relationship” with the United States, and that it seeks to focus on six-party talks with the west.
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Original:  The two French journalists kidnapped on Wednesday north-east of the capital Kabul are believed to be in good health, although the condition of their three Afghan assistants is unknown.
Revised:  Two French journalists kidnapped on Wednesday north-east of the capital Kabul are believed to be in good health, although the condition of their three Afghan assistants is unknown.
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Original:  According to The Financial Times the minimum price for a half liter of Vodka is now RUB 89 (US$2.94, €2.05), nearly double what it was before the price raise.
Revised:  According to The new minimum price for a half liter of Vodka is now RUB 89 (US$2.94, €2.05), nearly double what it was before the price raise.
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Original:  According to The new minimum price for a half liter of Vodka is now RUB 89  (US$2.94, €2.05), nearly double what it was before the price raise.
Revised:  The new minimum price for a half liter of Vodka is now RUB 89 (US$2.94, €2.05), nearly double what it was before the price raise.
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Original:  According to The new minimum price for a half liter of Vodka is now RUB 89  (US$2.94, €2.05), nearly double what it was before the price raise.
Revised:  According to The new minimum price for a half liter of Vodka is now 89 (US$2.94, €2.05), nearly double what it was before the price raise.
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Original:  The new minimum price for a half liter of Vodka is now 89 roubles (US$2.94, €2.05), nearly double what it was before the price raise.
Revised:  The new minimum price for a half liter of vodka is now 89 roubles (US$2.94, €2.05), nearly double what it was before the price raise.
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Original:  We had it for the meeting, and for the tournament," he said to the Associated Press news agency over the telephone   
Revised:  We had it for the meeting, and for the tournament," he said to the Associated Press news agency over the telephone . 
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Original: Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, described the incident , the provincial police chief, commented to the Voice of America news agency that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
Revised: Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, described the incident commented to the Voice of America news agency that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
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Original:  So this was one way of taking revenge from these people," Naveed said  
Revised:  So this was one way of taking revenge from these people," Naveed said . 
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Original:  Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, described the incident commented to the Voice of America news agency that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
Revised:  Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, described the incident to Voice of America news agency that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
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Original:  Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, described the incident commented to the Voice of America news agency that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
Revised:  Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, described the incident commented to the Voice of America , that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
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Original: Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, described the incident to Voice of America , that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
Revised: Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, said to Voice of America , that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
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Original: Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, described the incident to Voice of America , that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
Revised: Malik Naveed, the provincial police chief, described the incident to Voice of America that the attack may have been a retaliatory move against the residents of the town.
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Original: AARHUS, DENMARK - An ax-wielding Somalia man attempted to break into the house of controversial cartoonist Kurt Westergaard on Friday night in what the PET called a “terror-related” attack.
Revised:  An ax-wielding Somalia man attempted to break into the house of controversial cartoonist Kurt Westergaard on Friday night in what the PET called a “terror-related” attack.
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Original: An ax-wielding Somalia man attempted to break into the house of controversial cartoonist Kurt Westergaard on Friday night in what the PET called a “terror-related” attack.
Revised: An axe-wielding Somali man attempted to break into the house of controversial cartoonist Kurt Westergaard on Friday night in what the PET called a “terror-related” attack.
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Original:  According to a statement by the agency, the attacker has “close relations to the Somali terrorist group, al-Shabaab, and al-Qaida leaders in eastern Africa.”
Revised:  According to a statement by the agency, the attacker has “close relations to the Somali terrorist group, al-Shabaab, and al-Qaeda leaders in eastern Africa.”
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Original:  The man, whose name has yet to be released, was shot in the leg and hand after turning the ax on responding police officers.
Revised:  The man, whose name has yet to be released, was shot in the leg and hand after turning the axe on responding police officers.
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Original:  Westergaard’s five-year-old granddaughter was sleeping over at his house when a man wielding ax and knife cracked a window, apparently setting off a house alarm.
Revised:  Westergaard’s five-year-old granddaughter was sleeping over at his house when a man wielding an axe and knife cracked a window, apparently setting off a house alarm.
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Original:  The attacker is now charged with  attempted murder of Westergaard and the police officer.
Revised:  The attacker is now charged with the attempted murder of Westergaard and the police officer.
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Original:  The plane, wich was a single-engine Vickers built in 1911, was lost in the Antarctic ices since 1975.
Revised:  The plane, which was a single-engine Vickers built in 1911, was lost in the Antarctic ices since 1975.
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Original: The expedition , which was in Antarctica to help conserve huts used by the Australian explorer Douglas Mawson in the early twentieth century.
Revised: The expedition was in Antarctica to help conserve huts used by the Australian explorer Douglas Mawson in the early twentieth century.
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Original:  The team also unsuccessfully searched for the plane for three summers.
Revised:  The team unsuccessfully searched for the plane for three summers.
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Original:  The team also unsuccessfully searched for the plane for three summers.
Revised:  The team also unsuccessfully searched for the aircraft for three summers.
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Original: The expedition was in Antarctica to help conserve huts used by the Australian explorer Douglas Mawson in the early twentieth century.
Revised: The expedition is in Antarctica to help conserve huts used by the Australian explorer Douglas Mawson in the early twentieth century.
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Original:  The plane, which was a single-engine Vickers built in 1911, was lost in the Antarctic ices since 1975.
Revised:  The plane, which was a single-engine Vickers built in 1911, has been lost in the Antarctic ices since 1975.
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Original:   "  Magnetometer, ground-penetrating radar  metal detectors and all sorts of things to try and look for it, but in the end it was just a combination of a very low tide, good weather and a thin ice melt," commented Tony Stewart, a member of the team, as quoted by the Australian Broadcasting Corporation.
Revised:  " We've used a Magnetometer, ground-penetrating radar metal detectors and all sorts of things to try and look for it, but in the end it was just a combination of a very low tide, good weather and a thin ice melt," commented Tony Stewart, a member of the team, as quoted by the Australian Broadcasting Corporation.
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Original:   "  Magnetometer, ground-penetrating radar  metal detectors and all sorts of things to try and look for it, but in the end it was just a combination of a very low tide, good weather and a thin ice melt," commented Tony Stewart, a member of the team, as quoted by the Australian Broadcasting Corporation.
Revised:  " Magnetometer, ground-penetrating radar , metal detectors and all sorts of things to try and look for it, but in the end it was just a combination of a very low tide, good weather and a thin ice melt," commented Tony Stewart, a member of the team, as quoted by the Australian Broadcasting Corporation.
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Original:  Today at 2PM EDT, the Bruins will hold the AT&T Legends Classic where former Bruins legends such as Cam Neely and Terry O'Reilly and current Bruins' coach Claude Julien will be joined by celebrities such as Worcester, Massachusetts native actor and comedian Denis Leary, along with Kiefer Sutherland and film director Bobby Farrelly with groups facing off in two teams.
Revised:  Today at 2PM EDT, the Bruins held the AT&T Legends Classic where former Bruins legends such as Cam Neely and Terry O'Reilly and current Bruins' coach Claude Julien will be joined by celebrities such as Worcester, Massachusetts native actor and comedian Denis Leary, along with Kiefer Sutherland and film director Bobby Farrelly with groups facing off in two teams.
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Original:  Today at 2PM EDT, the Bruins will hold the AT&T Legends Classic where former Bruins legends such as Cam Neely and Terry O'Reilly and current Bruins' coach Claude Julien will be joined by celebrities such as Worcester, Massachusetts native actor and comedian Denis Leary, along with Kiefer Sutherland and film director Bobby Farrelly with groups facing off in two teams.
Revised:  Today at 2PM EDT, the Bruins will hold the AT&T Legends Classic where former Bruins legends such as Cam Neely and Terry O'Reilly and current Bruins' coach Claude Julien were joined by celebrities such as Worcester, Massachusetts native actor and comedian Denis Leary, along with Kiefer Sutherland and film director Bobby Farrelly with groups facing off in two teams.
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Original:  The game will be held depsite the snow which has been forecast for the Boston area.
Revised:  The game was held despite the snow which has been forecast for the Boston area.
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Original:  The Afghan parliament has rejected president Hamid Karzai's nominees for his new cabinet.
Revised: Afghan President Hamid Karzai The Afghan parliament has rejected president Hamid Karzai's nominees for his new cabinet.
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Original:  It did however approve the nominees for the positions of Defense, Interior and Finance ministers    
Revised:  It did however approve the nominees for the positions of Defense, Interior and Finance ministers . 
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Original:  He told local residents that if they want to be protected, they have to bring their sons to the national army.
Revised:  Karzai told local residents that if they want to be protected, they have to bring their sons to the national army.
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Original: Not just for smoking: Tobacco oil also makes for an efficient source of biofuel A team of researchers from the Thomas Jefferson University's Biotechnology Foundation Laboratories  in the United States have managed to increase the amount of oil produced by tobacco leaves.
Revised: Not just for smoking: Tobacco oil also makes for an efficient source of biofuel A team of researchers from the Thomas Jefferson University's Biotechnology Foundation Laboratories (BFL) in the United States have managed to increase the amount of oil produced by tobacco leaves.
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Original:  Tobacco oil can be very efficiently converted to biofuel but most oil is located in the seeds, which the plant does not produce many of   
Revised:  Tobacco oil can be very efficiently converted to biofuel but most oil is located in the seeds, which the plant does not produce many of . 
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Original:  By genetic engineering, they achieved oil yields of 5.8\% oil per dry weight by modifying the DGAT while changes to the LEC2 resulted in a yield of 6.8\% per dry weight  
Revised:  By genetic engineering, they achieved oil yields of 5.8\% oil per dry weight by modifying the DGAT while changes to the LEC2 resulted in a yield of 6.8\% per dry weight . 
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Original:  The oil has previously been tested for powering diesel-fueled vehicles and can be more efficiently converted than the product of  other crop plants.
Revised:  The oil has previously been tested for powering diesel-fueled vehicles and can be more efficiently converted than the product of many other crop plants.
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Original:  Three days of mourning were declared in the Rio de Janeiro greater area, and celebrations scheduled for January 6 were called off  
Revised:  Three days of mourning were declared in the Rio de Janeiro greater area, and celebrations scheduled for January 6 were called off . 
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Original: Spectator killed by vehicle at Argentinian racetrack Sonia Natalia Gallardo, 28  died Saturday afternoon in a hospital after being struck by an out-of-control racecar in the Dakar Rally  .
Revised: Spectator killed by vehicle at Argentinian racetrack Sonia Natalia Gallardo, 28 , died Saturday afternoon in a hospital after being struck by an out-of-control racecar in the Dakar Rally .
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Original: Spectator killed by vehicle at Argentinian racetrack Sonia Natalia Gallardo, 28  died Saturday afternoon in a hospital after being struck by an out-of-control racecar in the Dakar Rally  .
Revised: Spectator killed by vehicle at Argentinian racetrack Sonia Natalia Gallardo, 28 died Saturday afternoon in a hospital after being struck by an out-of-control racecar in the Dakar Rally , in Argentina .
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Original: File:Ólafur Ragnar Grímsson.jpg||President Ólafur Ragnar Grímsson.
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Original: The Icelandic government threatened to resign if the bill was not passed by parliament , which it did so by a slim three vote majority: 33 in favour and 30 against.
Revised: The Icelandic government threatened to resign if the bill was not passed by parliament . it did so by a slim three vote majority: 33 in favour and 30 against.
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Original: The Icelandic government threatened to resign if the bill was not passed by parliament , which it did so by a slim three vote majority: 33 in favour and 30 against.
Revised: The Icelandic government threatened to resign if the bill was not passed by parliament , which it did so by a slim three vote majority: 33 in favour , 30 against.
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