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Original:  Before this assignment was announced, Goodwin worked as an associate in his family's Charleston-based law firm . Goodwin will serve as a temporary replacement of the late Senator Robert Byrd, who died at the age of 92 on June 28 of this year .
Revised:  Before this assignment was announced, Goodwin worked as an associate in his family's Charleston-based law firm Goodwin will serve as a temporary replacement of the late Senator Robert Byrd, who died at the age of 92 on June 28 of this year .
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Original:  Before this assignment was announced, Goodwin worked as an associate in his family's Charleston-based law firm . Goodwin will serve as a temporary replacement of the late Senator Robert Byrd, who died at the age of 92 on June 28 of this year .
Revised:  Before this assignment was announced, Goodwin worked as an associate in his family's Charleston-based law firm . .
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Original:  however, it could occur as early as November 2. Senator Jay Rockefeller (D-West Virginia) says that the appointment of the Senate's 59th Democrat is crucial to passing an unemployment benefits bill that has been blocked by members of the Republican Party.
Revised:  however, it could occur as early as November 2. Senator Jay Rockefeller , member of the Democratic Party in West Virginia, says that the appointment of the Senate's 59th Democrat is crucial to passing an unemployment benefits bill that has been blocked by members of the Republican Party.
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Original:  "My responsibility (is) to work very hard every day to maintain the trust of the people of West Virginia," Goodwin said  "My sole objective will be to make West Virginia proud.
Revised:  "My responsibility is to work very hard every day to maintain the trust of the people of West Virginia," Goodwin said "My sole objective will be to make West Virginia proud.
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Original:  "My responsibility (is) to work very hard every day to maintain the trust of the people of West Virginia," Goodwin said  "My sole objective will be to make West Virginia proud.
Revised:  "My responsibility (is) to work very hard every day to maintain the trust of the people of West Virginia," Goodwin said . "My sole objective will be to make West Virginia proud.
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Original:  I'm looking forward to it . " 
Revised:  I'm looking forward to it , " 
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Original:  I'm looking forward to it . " 
Revised:  I'm looking forward to it . " he added.
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Original: Goodwin,  36, will become the youngest member of the Senate.
Revised: Goodwin, who is 36, will become the youngest member of the Senate.
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Original: Location of West Virginia Joe Manchin, the governor of U.S. state of West Virginia, named attorney Carte Goodwin to replace the late Robert C. Byrd, who died at the age 92 on June 28, in the U.S. Senate until a special election is held.
Revised: Location of West Virginia Joe Manchin, governor of West Virginia, named attorney Carte Goodwin to replace the late Robert C. Byrd, who died at the age 92 on June 28, in the U.S. Senate until a special election is held.
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Original: Location of West Virginia Joe Manchin, governor of West Virginia, named attorney Carte Goodwin to replace the late Robert C. Byrd, who died at the age 92 on June 28, in the U.S. Senate until a special election is held.
Revised: Location of West Virginia Joe Manchin, governor of West Virginia, named attorney Carte Goodwin to replace the late Robert C. Byrd, who died at age 92 on June 28, in the U.S. Senate until a special election is held.
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Original:  The special election has not been scheduled ;
Revised:  A special election has not been scheduled ;
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Original: A special election has been scheduled for November 2010, with another special election in 2012 to fill the last two months of Byrd's  term.
Revised: A special election has been scheduled for November 2010, with another election in 2012 to fill the last two months of Byrd's term.
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Original: Location of West Virginia File:CarteGoodwin.jpg|Carte Goodwin Joe Manchin, governor of West Virginia, named attorney Carte Goodwin to replace the late Robert C. Byrd, who died at age 92 on June 28, in the U.S. Senate until a special election is held.
Revised: Location of West Virginia Joe Manchin, governor of West Virginia, named attorney Carte Goodwin to replace the late Robert C. Byrd, who died at age 92 on June 28, in the U.S. Senate until a special election is held.
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Original:  A special election has been scheduled for November 2010, with another election in 2012 to fill the last weeks of Byrd's term along with the six years of a new term.
Revised:  The special election has been scheduled for November 2010, with another election in 2012 to fill the last weeks of Byrd's term along with the six years of a new term.
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Original:  27 people are confirmed dead, while reports of injuries range from 167 to 270, and officials said the death toll is likely to rise.
Revised:  27 people are confirmed dead, while reports of injuries totaled 270, and officials said the death toll is likely to rise.
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Original:  "Rigi's confessions prove that the United States, Zionists and some European countries are directly linked with the Zahedan blasts, because he had confessed that the U.S. wants bomb attacks to be carried out across Iran...one [can] not doubt the involvement of secret foreign services in the efforts to generate tension amongst Muslims.  
Revised:  "Rigi's confessions prove that the United States, Zionists and some European countries are directly linked with the Zahedan blasts, because he had confessed that the U.S. wants bomb attacks to be carried out across Iran...one [can] not doubt the involvement of secret foreign services in the efforts to generate tension amongst Muslims. " 
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Original:  "Rigi's confessions prove that the United States, Zionists and some European countries are directly linked with the Zahedan blasts, because he had confessed that the U.S. wants bomb attacks to be carried out across Iran...one [can] not doubt the involvement of secret foreign services in the efforts to generate tension amongst Muslims.  
Revised:  "Rigi's confessions prove that the United States, Zionists and some European countries are directly linked with the Zahedan blasts, because he had confessed that the U.S. wants bomb attacks to be carried out across Iran...one [can] not doubt the involvement of secret foreign services in the efforts to generate tension amongst Muslims. Related new
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Original: Apple Inc  announced Friday that it will give owners of its new iPhone 4 a free case in response to mounting concerns over the device's antenna placement.
Revised: Apple Inc . announced Friday that it will give owners of its new iPhone 4 a free case in response to mounting concerns over the device's antenna placement.
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Original:  He showed videos demonstrating a drop in signal strength for other smartphones when held in a certain way  to help make his point.
Revised:  He showed videos demonstrating a drop in signal strength when held in a certain way to help make his point.
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Original:  He showed videos demonstrating a drop in signal strength for other smartphones when held in a certain way  to help make his point.
Revised:  He showed videos demonstrating a drop in signal strength for other smartphones when held in a certain way for other smartphones to help make his point.
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Original:  Jobs attributed the small increase to fewer iPhone 4 users putting cases on their devices  
Revised:  Jobs attributed the small increase to fewer iPhone 4 users putting cases on their devices . 
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Original:  The group said that Apple's move to give away free cases is a good first step, but not permanent enough to earn a higher rating  
Revised:  The group said that Apple's move to give away free cases is a good first step, but not permanent enough to earn a higher rating . 
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Original: Apple CEO Steve Jobs unveiling the iPhone 4 Apple Inc. announced Friday that it will give owners of its new iPhone 4 a free case in response to mounting concerns over the device's antenna placement.
Revised: Apple CEO Steve Jobs unveiling iPhone 4 Apple Inc. announced Friday that it will give owners of its new iPhone 4 a free case in response to mounting concerns over the device's antenna placement.
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Original:  Attorney General Arturo Chavez on Friday said nearly 25,000 people have died in the last three and a half year period.
Revised:  Attorney General Arturo Chavez on Friday said nearly 25,000 people have died in the last three and a half 
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Original:  A car bomb that exploded at about 20:00 local time Thursday (01:00 Friday UTC) in a violent area of the city.
Revised:  A car bomb that exploded at about 20:00 local time Thursday (01:00 Friday UTC) in a violent area of 
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Original:  Intelligence expert Fred Burton said, "For this to be an improvised grenade attack, in some capacity, it doesn't surprise me  " Ciudad Juárez has a history for trafficking drugs to the United States,  into Texas.
Revised:  Intelligence expert Fred Burton said, "For this to be an improvised grenade attack, in some capacity, it doesn't surprise me . " Ciudad Juárez has a history for trafficking drugs to the United States, into Texas.
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Original:  Intelligence expert Fred Burton said, "For this to be an improvised grenade attack, in some capacity, it doesn't surprise me  " Ciudad Juárez has a history for trafficking drugs to the United States,  into Texas.
Revised:  Intelligence expert Fred Burton said, "For this to be an improvised grenade attack, in some capacity, it doesn't surprise me " Ciudad Juárez has a history for trafficking drugs to the United States, especially into Texas.
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Original: JPG |Prime Minister Julia Gillard announced the election date of August 21. stock photo ]] Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard has announced that the nation's voters will go to the polls on August 21.
Revised: JPG |Prime Minister Julia Gillard announced the election date of August 21. ]] Australian Prime Minister Julia Gillard has announced that the nation's voters will go to the polls on August 21.
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Original:  He also said that the government's forces had destroyed Rebel vehicles in the fighting .
Revised:  He also said that the government's forces had destroyed rebel vehicles in the fighting .
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Original:  The Sudanese Government also stated that they had captured 86 rebels of the JEM . The Justice and Equality Movement denied the government's statements, saying that they had defeated the army, not the other way around.
Revised:  The Sudanese Government also stated that they had captured 86 people . The Justice and Equality Movement denied the government's statements, saying that they had defeated the army, not the other way around.
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Original:  The comes after the Government previously said it had killed hundreds of rebels, back in May of this year .
Revised:  This incident is the second of its kind in recent months; In May, several hundred rebel fighters were killed by the government .
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Original:  The Justice and Equality Movement is one of two movements to boycott peace talks with the government , in Doha, with the other being the Sudan Liberation Army.
Revised:  The Justice and Equality Movement is one of two movements to boycott peace talks with the government ; the other one is the Sudan Liberation Army.
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Original:  The Darfur Region has been subject to violence for the past seven years, when the rebels began to fight the government - saying that the government was neglecting the western part of the country  .
Revised:  The Darfur Region has been subject to violence for the past seven years, when the rebels began to fight the government , saying that the government was neglecting the western part of the country .
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Original:  The Darfur Region has been subject to violence for the past seven years, when the rebels began to fight the government - saying that the government was neglecting the western part of the country  .
Revised:  The Darfur Region has been subject to violence for the past seven years, when the rebels began to fight the government - saying that the the western part of the country .
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Original:  The Darfur Region has been subject to violence for the past seven years, when the rebels began to fight the government - saying that the government was neglecting the western part of the country  .
Revised:  The Darfur Region has been subject to violence for the past seven years, when the rebels began to fight the government - saying that the government was neglecting the western part of the country was being neglected .
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Original:  The UN has said  over 300,000 people have been killed, and 2.7 million people  forced to relocate, the Sudanese Government claims the figure is 10,000 people killed .
Revised:  The UN has said that over 300,000 people have been killed, and 2.7 million people forced to relocate, the Sudanese Government claims the figure is 10,000 people killed .
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Original:  The UN has said  over 300,000 people have been killed, and 2.7 million people  forced to relocate, the Sudanese Government claims the figure is 10,000 people killed .
Revised:  The UN has said over 300,000 people have been killed, and 2.7 million people have been forced to relocate, the Sudanese Government claims the figure is 10,000 people killed .
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Original:  The UN has said  over 300,000 people have been killed, and 2.7 million people  forced to relocate, the Sudanese Government claims the figure is 10,000 people killed .
Revised:  The UN has said over 300,000 people have been killed, and 2.7 million people forced to relocate, while the Sudanese government claims only 10,000 people killed .
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Original:  The UN has said  over 300,000 people have been killed, and 2.7 million people  forced to relocate, the Sudanese Government claims the figure is 10,000 people killed .
Revised:  The UN has said over 300,000 people have been killed, and 2.7 million people forced to relocate, the Sudanese Government claims the figure is 10,000 people have died .
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Original:  The Sudanese President, Omar al-Bashiri has been charged of genocide due to his handling of the situation in Darfur
Revised:  The Sudanese President, Omar al-Bashiri has been charged with genocide due to his handling of the situation in Darfur
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Original:  The guests that appeared on Friday Night with Jonathan Ross on Friday were English football player David Beckham, American actor Mickey Rourke and Jackie Chan, an actor from Hong Kong.  ]  
Revised:  The guests that appeared on Friday Night with Jonathan Ross on Friday were English football player David Beckham, American actor Mickey Rourke and Jackie Chan, an actor from Hong Kong. t] 
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Original: ]] Jonathan Ross has now departed from the BBC, having presented his final Friday Night with Jonathan Ross for over nine years, as well as hosting his last programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the BBC .
Revised: ]] Jonathan Ross has now departed from the BBC, having presented his final Friday Night with Jonathan Ross after more than nine years, as well as hosting his last programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the BBC .
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Original: ]] Jonathan Ross has now departed from the BBC, having presented his final Friday Night with Jonathan Ross for over nine years, as well as hosting his last programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the BBC .
Revised: ]] Jonathan Ross has now departed from the BBC, having presented his final Friday Night with Jonathan Ross for over nine years, as well as hosting his last programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the news corporation .
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Original: ]] Jonathan Ross has now departed from the BBC, having presented his final  Friday Night with Jonathan Ross  after more than nine years , as well as hosting his last programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the news corporation.
Revised: ]] Jonathan Ross presented his final Friday Night with Jonathan Ross after more than nine years , as well as hosting his last programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the news corporation.
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Original: ]] Jonathan Ross has now departed from the BBC, having presented his final  Friday Night with Jonathan Ross  after more than nine years , as well as hosting his last programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the news corporation.
Revised: ]] Jonathan Ross has now departed from the BBC, having presented his final Friday Night with Jonathan Ross after more than nine years . He also finished hosting his programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the news corporation.
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Original: Image:Goldman Ross 2.jpg|Jonathan Ross (right) with Jane Goldman (left), his current wife .]] Jonathan Ross presented his final episode of Friday Night with Jonathan Ross on the BBC after more than nine years.
Revised: Image:Goldman Ross 2.jpg|Jonathan Ross (right) with his wife Jane Goldman .]] Jonathan Ross presented his final episode of Friday Night with Jonathan Ross on the BBC after more than nine years.
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Original:  He also finished hosting his programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the news corporation .
Revised:  He also finished hosting his programme on BBC Radio 2. Ross announced his departure from the BBC in January 2010, having decided not to renew his contract with the broadcasting organisation .
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Original:  When talking about his programme on BBC Radio 2, during his final pre-recorded three-hour-long programme , Jonathan Ross commented: "It has been a tremendous experience for us - obviously I like to think that the place has always been a little livelier while we are around.
Revised:  When talking about his programme on BBC Radio 2, during his final pre-recorded three-hour-long edition broadcast yesterday , Jonathan Ross commented: "It has been a tremendous experience for us - obviously I like to think that the place has always been a little livelier while we are around.
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Original:  Jonathan Ross is now expected to be presenting a new television chat show on  ITV at some point in the future.
Revised:  Jonathan Ross is expected to present a new television chat show on ITV at some point in the future.
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Original:  The Westboro Baptist Church will be protecting outside the venue during her concert.
Revised:  The Westboro Baptist Church will be protesting outside the venue during her concert.
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Original: The Church, based in Topeka, Kansas and not affiliated with any Baptist organization, has planned to protest at Gaga's prior concerts held in St. Louis.
Revised: The Church, based in Topeka, Kansas and not affiliated with any Baptist organization, had planned to protest at Gaga's prior concerts held in St. Louis.
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Original: Gaga tells her fan to not listen to the group.
Revised: Gaga tells her fans to not listen to the group.
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Original:  Although we have had protesters before, as well as fundamentalists at the show this group of protesters are hate criminals and preach using lude  and violent language and imagery that I wish I [could] protect you all from."
Revised:  Although we have had protesters before, as well as fundamentalists at the show this group of protesters are hate criminals and preach using lude sic and violent language and imagery that I wish I [could] protect you all from."
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Original: Traralgon went within a game and percentage of ladder leader Maffra with a 118 point victory over Warragul in their round 14 Gippsland Football League match.
Revised:  went within a game and percentage of ladder leader Maffra with a 118 point victory over Warragul in their round 14 Gippsland Football League match.
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Original: Traralgon went within a game and percentage of ladder leader Maffra with a 118 point victory over Warragul in their round 14 Gippsland Football League match.
Revised: Traralgon went within a game and percentage of ladder leader with a 118 point victory over Warragul in their round 14 Gippsland Football League match.
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Original: Traralgon went within a game and percentage of ladder leader Maffra with a 118 point victory over Warragul in their round 14 Gippsland Football League match.
Revised: Traralgon went within a game and percentage of ladder leader Maffra with a 118 point victory over in their round 14 Gippsland Football League match.
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Original:  The Gippsland Football League, officially the Gippsland League, is the only major Australian rules football competition in the Gippsland region, according to the Victorian Country Football League .
Revised:  The Gippsland Football League, officially the Gippsland League, is the only major Australian rules football competition in the region, according to the Victorian Country Football League .
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Original:  The Gippsland Football League, officially the Gippsland League, is the only major Australian rules football competition in the Gippsland region, according to the Victorian Country Football League .
Revised:  The Gippsland Football League, officially the Gippsland League, is the only major Australian rules football competition in the Gippsland region, according to the .
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Original:  Drouin played Morwell in the other match played on Saturday.
Revised:  played in the other match played on Saturday.
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Original:  On Sunday, Maffra hosted Sale in Maffra, and Moe hosted Wonthaggi in Morwell to complete the round
Revised:  On Sunday, Maffra hosted in Maffra, and Moe hosted Wonthaggi in Morwell to complete the round
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Original:  On Sunday, Maffra hosted Sale in Maffra, and Moe hosted Wonthaggi in Morwell to complete the round
Revised:  On Sunday, Maffra hosted Sale in Maffra, and hosted in Morwell to complete the round
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Original:  BP hopes for the well's pressure to rise at or above 7,500 PSI.
Revised:  BP hopes for the well's pressure to rise to or above 7,500 PSI.
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Original: "This tool was created using java script that uses basic Pythagorean theorem ( A2 + B2 = C2 ) to calculate the distance between two points.
Revised: "This tool was created using java script that uses basic Pythagorean theorem ( ) to calculate the distance between two points.
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Original:  The distance is simply SQRT( (N1 - N2)2 + (E1 - E2)2 ) . ROV coordinates match the location within a few feet when looking at the well because obviously the ROV can not be over the exact center because that is where the BOP is," said Higgins.
Revised:  The distance is simply . ROV coordinates match the location within a few feet when looking at the well because obviously the ROV can not be over the exact center because that is where the BOP is," said Higgins.
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