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Original:  Tom van Vollenhoven's final Saints match was against Hull Kingston Rovers in April 1968 and his final game of rugby league was guesting for Great Britain in a trial match for the 1968 World Cup, at Thrum Hall, Halifax.
Revised:  Tom van Vollenhoven's final St. Helens match was against Hull Kingston Rovers in April 1968 and his final game of rugby league was guesting for Great Britain in a trial match for the 1968 World Cup, at Thrum Hall, Halifax.
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Original:  This includes a record 62 in the 1958–59 Northern Rugby Football League season.
Revised:  This includes a record 62-tries scored during the 1958–59 Northern Rugby Football League season.
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Original:  This includes a record 62 in the 1958–59 Northern Rugby Football League season.
Revised:  This includes a record 62 in the 1958–59 season.
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Original: Gideon van Zyl (born November 24 , 1989 in Johannesburg) is a South African judoka.
Revised: Gideon van Zyl (born 24 , 1989 in Johannesburg) is a South African judoka.
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Original:  Mileikowsky's grandson is  Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu.
Revised:  Mileikowsky's grandson is former Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu.
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Original: Rabbi Nathan Mileikowsky (August 15, 1879 – February 4, 1935) was a Zionist rabbi, educator, writer and political activist . Mileikowsky's grandson is former Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu.
Revised: Rabbi Nathan Mileikowsky (August 15, 1879 – February 4, 1935) was an Israeli political activist, rabbi, and writer . Mileikowsky's grandson is former Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu.
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Original:  Category:1879 births Category:1935 deaths Category:Burials at the Jewish cemetery on the Mount of Olives Category:Israeli people of Belarusian-Jewish descent Category:Israeli people of Polish-Jewish descent Category:Israeli political activists Category:Israeli rabbis  Category:Jewish educators Category:Jews in Mandatory Palestine Category:Netanyahu family Category:People from Jerusalem Category:Polish emigrants to Mandatory Palestine Category:Polish Zionists Category:Rhetoricia
Revised:  Category:1879 births Category:1935 deaths Category:Burials at the Jewish cemetery on the Mount of Olives Category:Israeli people of Belarusian-Jewish descent Category:Israeli people of Polish-Jewish descent Category:Israeli political activists Category:Israeli rabbis Category:Jewish activists Category:Jewish educators Category:Jews in Mandatory Palestine Category:Netanyahu family Category:People from Jerusalem Category:Polish emigrants to Mandatory Palestine Category:Polish Zionists Category:Rhetoricia
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Original: Rabbi Nathan Mileikowsky (August 15, 1879 – February 4, 1935) was an Israeli political activist, rabbi, and writer.
Revised: Rabbi Nathan Mileikowsky (August 15, 1879 – February 4, 1935) was an Polish political activist, rabbi, and writer.
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Original: Rabbi Nathan Mileikowsky (August 15, 1879 – February 4, 1935) was an Polish political activist, rabbi, and writer.
Revised: Rabbi Nathan Mileikowsky (August 15, 1879 – February 4, 1935) was an Zionist political activist, rabbi, and writer.
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Original: Athletes (track and field) at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:Pan American Games competitors for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2007 Pan American Games Category:  Commonwealth Games competitors for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Championships in Athletics athletes for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2015 Pan American Gam
Revised: Athletes (track and field) at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:Pan American Games competitors for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2007 Pan American Games Category: Athletes (track and field) at the 2015 Pan American Games Category: Commonwealth Games competitors for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Championships in Athletics athletes for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2015 Pan American Gam
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Original: Kaina Martinez (born 20 February 1986 in the Garifuna village Seine Bight, Stann Creek District ) is a Belizean athlete.
Revised: Kaina Martinez (born 20 February 1986 ) is a Belizean athlete.
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Original: Athletes (track and field) at the 2007 Pan American Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2015 Pan American Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Championships in Athletics athletes for Belize Category:Central American Games gold medalists  Category:Central American Games silver medalis
Revised: Athletes (track and field) at the 2007 Pan American Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2015 Pan American Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Championships in Athletics athletes for Belize Category:Central American Games gold medalists for Belize Category:Central American Games silver medalis
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Original: Athletes (track and field) at the 2007 Pan American Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2015 Pan American Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Championships in Athletics athletes for Belize Category:Central American Games gold medalists for Belize Category:Central American Games silver medalis
Revised: Athletes (track and field) at the 2007 Pan American Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2015 Pan American Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for Belize Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Athletes (track and field) at the 2014 Commonwealth Games Category:World Championships in Athletics athletes for Belize Category:Central American Games gold medalists for Belize Category:Central American Games silver medalists for Beli
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Original: La Nyalla Mahmud Matalitti (born 10 May 1959) is formerly chairman of the Football Association of Indonesia (PSSI).
Revised: La Nyalla Mahmud Mattalitti (born 10 May 1959) is formerly chairman of the Football Association of Indonesia (PSSI).
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Original: La Nyalla Mahmud Matalitti (born 10 May 1959) is formerly chairman of the Football Association of Indonesia (PSSI).
Revised: La Nyalla Mahmud Matalitti (born 10 May 1959) is a former chairman of the Football Association of Indonesia (PSSI).
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Original:  SMP 1 Surabaya ( 1971-1974 ) SMA Negeri 3 Surabaya ( 1974-1977 ) Faculty of Engineering, Brawijaya University ( 1977- Not completed)
Revised:  SMP 1 Surabaya ( 1971–1974 ) SMA Negeri 3 Surabaya ( 1974-1977 ) Faculty of Engineering, Brawijaya University ( 1977- Not completed)
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Original:  SMP 1 Surabaya ( 1971-1974 ) SMA Negeri 3 Surabaya ( 1974-1977 ) Faculty of Engineering, Brawijaya University ( 1977- Not completed)
Revised:  SMP 1 Surabaya ( 1971-1974 ) SMA Negeri 3 Surabaya ( 1974–1977 ) Faculty of Engineering, Brawijaya University ( 1977- Not completed)
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Original:  SMP 1 Surabaya ( 1971-1974 ) SMA Negeri 3 Surabaya ( 1974-1977 ) Faculty of Engineering, Brawijaya University ( 1977- Not completed)
Revised:  SMP 1 Surabaya ( 1971-1974 ) SMA Negeri 3 Surabaya ( 1974-1977 ) Faculty of Engineering, Brawijaya University ( not completed)
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Original:  Experience organizations Chief MPW Pemuda Pancasila of East Java Treasurer of GM Kosgoro East Java Treasurer of the Regional Representatives Council (DPD)
Revised:  Experience organizations Chief of Regional Leadership Council of Pemuda Pancasila in East Java Treasurer of GM Kosgoro East Java Treasurer of the Regional Representatives Council (DPD)
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Original:  East Java Chairman of the Council of the National Association of Construction Employers (GAPEKNAS) Chairman of the Council of the Expert Construction Association of Indonesia (ATAKI) Chairman of the East Java Chamber of Commerce (Kadin) Vice Chairman of the National Sports Committee of Indonesia (KONI) East Java Province Chairman of the Board of the Province (Pengprov) PSSI East Java PSSI Executive Committee Member Chairman KPSI Vice Chairman of PSSI Chairman of PSSI
Revised:  East Java Chairman of the Council of the National Association of Construction Employers (GAPEKNAS) Chairman of the Council of the Expert Construction Association of Indonesia (ATAKI) Chairman of the East Java Chamber of Commerce (Kadin) Vice Chairman of the National Sports Committee of Indonesia (KONI) East Java Province Chairman of the Board of the Province (Pengprov) PSSI East Java PSSI Executive Committee Executive Committee member Chairman of KPSI Vice Chairman of PSSI Chairman of PSSI
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Original: Experience organizations Chief of Regional Leadership Council of Pemuda Pancasila in East Java Treasurer of GM Kosgoro East Java Treasurer of the Regional Representatives Council (DPD)
Revised: Organizations Chief of Regional Leadership Council of Pemuda Pancasila in East Java Treasurer of GM Kosgoro East Java Treasurer of the Regional Representatives Council (DPD)
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Original:  He denounced his support by saying that Prabowo and the party demanded  Rp40 billion (around $2.5 million) for the East Java gubernatorial nomination in the 2018 election.
Revised:  He denounced his support by saying that Prabowo and the party demanded him to pay Rp40 billion (around $2.5 million) for the East Java gubernatorial nomination in the 2018 election.
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Original:  In the same election, he runs for a seat in the Indonesian Senate from East Java.
Revised:  In the same election, he ran for a seat in the Indonesian Senate from East Java.
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Original: 200px|José Antonio Echeverría José Antonio Echeverría (July 16, 1932 in Cárdenas, Matanzas – March 13, 1957 in Havana, Cuba) was a Cuban revolutionary and student leader.
Revised:  José Antonio Echeverría (July 16, 1932 in Cárdenas, Matanzas – March 13, 1957 in Havana, Cuba) was a Cuban revolutionary and student leader.
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Original: External links AlmaMater entry Cuando los universitarios se levantaron contra el gobernante de Cuba (FOTOS) Revolt in Havana.
Revised: External links Cuando los universitarios se levantaron contra el gobernante de Cuba (FOTOS) Revolt in Havana.
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Original:  Anil Aggrawal considers it distinct from asexuality  and defines the latter as the lack of a sex drive . Aggrawal.
Revised:  Anil Aggrawal considers it distinct from asexuality , and defines the latter as the lack of a sex drive . Aggrawal.
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Original:  Anil Aggrawal considers it distinct from asexuality  and defines the latter as the lack of a sex drive . Aggrawal.
Revised:  Anil Aggrawal considers it distinct from asexuality and defines the latter as the lack of a sex drive , Aggrawal.
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Original: Grivetti, Shapiro, p. 1849 The São Tomé island was named by the Portuguese in honor of Saint Thomas, as they discovered the island on his feast day, while the Príncipe island (Prince's island) was named in honor of Afonso, Prince of Portugal, his father's favorite.
Revised: Grivetti, Shapiro, p. 1849 The São Tomé Island was named by the Portuguese in honor of Saint Thomas, as they discovered the island on his feast day, while the Príncipe island (Prince's island) was named in honor of Afonso, Prince of Portugal, his father's favorite.
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Original: Grivetti, Shapiro, p. 1849 The São Tomé Island was named by the Portuguese in honor of Saint Thomas, as they discovered the island on his feast day, while the Príncipe island (Prince's island) was named in honor of Afonso, Prince of Portugal, his father's favorite.
Revised: Grivetti, Shapiro, p. 1849 The São Tomé island was named by the Portuguese in honor of Saint Thomas, as they discovered the island on his feast day, while the Príncipe island (Prince's island) was named in honor of Afonso, Prince of Portugal, his father's favorite.
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Original:  The geographical location of the islands made them a crucial trading post of the transatlantic slave trade, Huang, Morrissete, p. 970 as they served as an assembly point of the slaves brought from the Gulf of Guinea and the Kingdom of Kongo and destined to the Americas.
Revised:  The geographical location of the islands made them a crucial trading post of the transatlantic slave trade, as they served as an assembly point of the slaves brought from the Gulf of Guinea and the Kingdom of Kongo and destined to the Americas.
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Original:  Considering the fact that not all patients will be able to have their abdomen closed on the first returnto the operating room what are other options that surgeons should consider?
Revised:  Considering the fact that not all patients will be able to undergo definitive reconstruction at first return, there are other options that surgeons should consider?
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Original:  Considering the fact that not all patients will be able to have their abdomen closed on the first returnto the operating room what are other options that surgeons should consider?
Revised:  Considering the fact that not all patients will be able to have their abdomen closed on the first returnto the operating room what are other options that surgeons can consider.
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Original:  The leading cause of death among trauma patients remains uncontrolled hemorrhage and accounts for approximately 30–40\% of trauma related deaths.
Revised:  The leading cause of death among trauma patients remains uncontrolled hemorrhage and accounts for approximately 30–40\% of trauma-related deaths.
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Original:  Damage control surgery is meant to be used as a measure that saves lives.
Revised:  Damage control surgery is meant to save lives.
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Original:  While this lifesaving method has resulted in a significant decrease in the morbidity and mortality of critically ill patients, complications can result and do exist .
Revised:  While this lifesaving method has significantly decreased the morbidity and mortality of critically ill patients, complications can result and do exist .
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Original:  While this lifesaving method has resulted in a significant decrease in the morbidity and mortality of critically ill patients, complications can result and do exist .
Revised:  While this lifesaving method has resulted in a significant decrease in the morbidity and mortality of critically ill patients, complications can result .
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Original:  The approach would provide a limited surgical intervention in order to control both hemorrhage and contamination.
Revised:  The approach would provide a limited surgical intervention to control hemorrhage and contamination.
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Original:  This will subsequently allow for clinicians to focus on reversing the physiologic insult prior to completing a definitive repair.
Revised:  This subsequently lets clinicians focus on reversing the physiologic insult prior to completing a definitive repair.
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Original:  The following goes through the different phases in order to illustrate step by step  how one might approach this.
Revised:  The following goes through the different phases to illustrate, step by step how one might approach this.
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Original:  The following goes through the different phases in order to illustrate step by step  how one might approach this.
Revised:  The following goes through the different phases in order to illustrate step by step , how one might approach this.
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Original:  In order for groups (i.e.  trauma centers) to be effective in damage control surgery, a multi-disciplinary team is critical.
Revised:  For groups (i.e. trauma centers) to be effective in damage control surgery, a multi-disciplinary team is critical.
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Original:  In order for groups (i.e.  trauma centers) to be effective in damage control surgery, a multi-disciplinary team is critical.
Revised:  In order for groups (i.e. , trauma centers) to be effective in damage control surgery, a multi-disciplinary team is critical.
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Original:  Eviscerating the intra-abdominal small bowel and packing all four abdominal quadrants usually will allow surgeons to establish initial hemorrhagic control.
Revised:  Eviscerating the intra-abdominal small bowel and packing all four abdominal quadrants usually helps surgeons establish initial hemorrhagic control.
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Original:  Solid organ injury (i.e.  spleen, kidney) should be dealt with by resection.
Revised:  Solid organ injury (i.e. , spleen, kidney) should be dealt with by resection.
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Original:  This has been described by Reilly and colleagues when they shunted the superior mesenteric artery in order to decrease the length of time spent in the operating room.
Revised:  This has been described by Reilly and colleagues when they shunted the superior mesenteric artery to decrease the length of time spent in the operating room.
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Original:  This has been described by Reilly and colleagues when they shunted the superior mesenteric artery in order to decrease the length of time spent in the operating room.
Revised:  This has been described by Reilly and colleagues when they shunted the superior mesenteric artery in order to decrease the length of time in the operating room.
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Original:  ICU resuscitation Upon completion of the initial phase of damage control  the key is to reverse the physiologic insult that has taken place.
Revised:  ICU resuscitation On completion of the initial phase of damage control the key is to reverse the physiologic insult that has taken place.
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Original:  ICU resuscitation Upon completion of the initial phase of damage control  the key is to reverse the physiologic insult that has taken place.
Revised:  ICU resuscitation Upon completion of the initial phase of damage control , the key is to reverse the physiologic insult that has taken place.
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Original:  ICU resuscitation Upon completion of the initial phase of damage control  the key is to reverse the physiologic insult that has taken place.
Revised:  ICU resuscitation Upon completion of the initial phase of damage control the key is to reverse the physiologic insult that took place.
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Original:  This specifically relates to factors such as acidosis, coagulopathy, and hypothermia (lethal triad) that many of these critically ill patients will develop.
Revised:  This specifically relates to factors such as acidosis, coagulopathy, and hypothermia (lethal triad) that many of these critically ill patients develop.
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Original:  This typically requires close monitoring in the intensive care unit, ventilator support, laboratory monitoring of resuscitation parameters (i.e.  lactate).
Revised:  This typically requires close monitoring in the intensive care unit, ventilator support, laboratory monitoring of resuscitation parameters (i.e. , lactate).
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Original:  The first 24 hours will often require a significant amount of resources (i.e.  blood products) and investment of time from personnel within the critical care team.
Revised:  The first 24 hours often require a significant amount of resources (i.e. blood products) and investment of time from personnel within the critical care team.
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Original:  The first 24 hours will often require a significant amount of resources (i.e.  blood products) and investment of time from personnel within the critical care team.
Revised:  The first 24 hours will often require a significant amount of resources (i.e. , blood products) and investment of time from personnel within the critical care team.
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Original:  In many circumstances, especially trauma patients will require a variety of injuries to be addressed by other specialties .
Revised:  In many circumstances, especially trauma patients , require that other specialties address a variety of injuries to be addressed by other specialties .
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Original:  In many circumstances, especially trauma patients will require a variety of injuries to be addressed by other specialties .
Revised:  In many circumstances, especially trauma patients will require a variety of injuries .
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Original:  Moving the patient  unless absolutely necessary early on can be detrimental.
Revised:  Moving the patient early on, unless absolutely necessary early on can be detrimental.
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Original:  Moving the patient  unless absolutely necessary early on can be detrimental.
Revised:  Moving the patient unless absolutely necessary , can be detrimental.
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Original:  The optimization will typically take 24 – 48 hours  depending on how severe the initial insult is.
Revised:  The optimization typically takes 24 – 48 hours depending on how severe the initial insult is.
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Original:  The optimization will typically take 24 – 48 hours  depending on how severe the initial insult is.
Revised:  The optimization will typically take 24 to 48 hours depending on how severe the initial insult is.
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Original:  The optimization will typically take 24 – 48 hours  depending on how severe the initial insult is.
Revised:  The optimization will typically take 24 – 48 hours , depending on how severe the initial insult is.
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Original:  Attention is then turned to performing the necessary bowel anastomosis or other definitive repairs (i.e.  vascular injuries).
Revised:  Attention is then turned to performing the necessary bowel anastomosis or other definitive repairs (i.e. , vascular injuries).
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Original:  An attempt should be made to close the abdominal fascia at the first take back in order to prevent complications that can result from having an open abdomen.
Revised:  An attempt should be made to close the abdominal fascia at the first take back , to prevent complications that can result from having an open abdomen.
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Original:  Considering the fact that not all patients will be able to undergo definitive reconstruction at first return, there are other options that surgeons can consider.
Revised:  Considering that not all patients will be able to undergo definitive reconstruction at first return, there are other options that surgeons can consider.
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Original:  Considering the fact that not all patients will be able to undergo definitive reconstruction at first return, there are other options that surgeons can consider.
Revised:  Considering the fact that not all patients can undergo definitive reconstruction at first return, there are other options that surgeons can consider.
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Original:  After about one week if the abdomen is not able to be closed surgeons should consider placing a Vicryl mesh to cover the abdominal contents.
Revised:  After about one week , if surgeons can't close the abdomen, they should consider placing a Vicryl mesh to cover the abdominal contents.
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Original:  This will then allow granulation to occur over a few weeks  with the subsequent ability to place a split-thickness skin graft (STSG) on top for coverage.
Revised:  This lets granulation occur over a few weeks with the subsequent ability to place a split-thickness skin graft (STSG) on top for coverage.
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