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Original:  A spokesperson said: “Unison doesn’t begrudge anybody the rate of pay for the job but obviously our membership will be concerned that while they are to face a pay freeze and people delivering frontline services are losing their jobs, there is a cohort of folk who appear to earn more than the most senior politician in the land.  
Revised:  A spokesperson said: “Unison doesn’t begrudge anybody the rate of pay for the job but obviously our membership will be concerned that while they are to face a pay freeze and people delivering frontline services are losing their jobs, there is a cohort of folk who appear to earn more than the most senior politician in the land. ” 
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Original:  A spokesperson said: “Unison doesn’t begrudge anybody the rate of pay for the job but obviously our membership will be concerned that while they are to face a pay freeze and people delivering frontline services are losing their jobs, there is a cohort of folk who appear to earn more than the most senior politician in the land.  
Revised:  A spokesperson said: “Unison doesn’t begrudge anybody the rate of pay for the job but obviously our membership will be concerned that while they are to face a pay freeze and people delivering frontline services are losing their jobs, there is a cohort of folk who appear to earn more than the most senior politician in the land. Related new
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Original: Over 800 National Health Service staff in Scotland are earning more than £140,000 each year - more than First Minister Alex Salmond.
Revised: Over 800 National Health Service staff in Scotland are earning more than £140,000 each year — more than First Minister Alex Salmond.
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Original: Jackie Baillie, health spokeswoman for the Scottish Labour Party, who uncovered the figures, said they were "astonishing", and urged health boards to examine if savings can be made by reducing salaries of top earners.
Revised: Jackie Baillie, health spokeswoman for the Labour Party, who uncovered the figures, said they were "astonishing", and urged health boards to examine if savings can be made by reducing salaries of top earners.
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Original: Jackie Baillie, health spokeswoman for the Scottish Labour Party, who uncovered the figures, said they were "astonishing", and urged health boards to examine if savings can be made by reducing salaries of top earners.
Revised: Jackie Baillie, health spokeswoman for the Scottish Labour Party, which uncovered the figures, said they were "astonishing", and urged health boards to examine if savings can be made by reducing salaries of top earners.
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Original:  Britain's largest health service industrial union, Unison, said that the government should explain why NHS salaries were so generous .
Revised:  Britain's largest health service industrial union, Unison, questioned the amount of money the NHS was paying .
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Original:  A spokesperson said: “ Unison doesn’t begrudge anybody the rate of pay for the job but obviously our membership will be concerned that while they are to face a pay freeze and people delivering frontline services are losing their jobs, there is a cohort of folk who appear to earn more than the most senior politician in the land. ”
Revised:  A spokesperson said: " Unison doesn’t begrudge anybody the rate of pay for the job but obviously our membership will be concerned that while they are to face a pay freeze and people delivering frontline services are losing their jobs, there is a cohort of folk who appear to earn more than the most senior politician in the land. ”
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Original:  A spokesperson said: “ Unison doesn’t begrudge anybody the rate of pay for the job but obviously our membership will be concerned that while they are to face a pay freeze and people delivering frontline services are losing their jobs, there is a cohort of folk who appear to earn more than the most senior politician in the land. ”
Revised:  A spokesperson said: “ Unison doesn’t begrudge anybody the rate of pay for the job but obviously our membership will be concerned that while they are to face a pay freeze and people delivering frontline services are losing their jobs, there is a cohort of folk who appear to earn more than the most senior politician in the land. "
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Original: The   soft rabbit is constructed out of pink wool, and is expected to remain on the mountain until 2025.
Revised: The The soft rabbit is constructed out of pink wool, and is expected to remain on the mountain until 2025.
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Original:  The artwork, titled "Hase" (which translates simply as "Rabbit"), is located at at height of 1600m on the mountain Colletto Fava, close to Bar La Baita, above the Village of Artesina, Piemonte, Italy.
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Original:  Though it seems like a giant children's toy at first glance, a closer look or an in-person exploration quickly leads to the realization that the rabbit's side is split open, and it's entrails pulled out.
Revised:  Though it seems like a giant children's toy at first glance, a closer look or an in-person exploration quickly leads to the realization that the rabbit's side is split open, and its entrails pulled out.
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Original: Wireless provider Sprint announced today, that they would be working with  RealNetworks to launch a streaming music service for Sprint wireless customers called Rhapsody Radio.
Revised: Wireless provider Sprint announced today, that they would be working with w: RealNetworks to launch a streaming music service for Sprint wireless customers called Rhapsody Radio.
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Original:  Selected streaming podcasts from  KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and  National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
Revised:  Selected streaming podcasts from w: KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
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Original:  Selected streaming podcasts from  KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and  National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
Revised:  Selected streaming podcasts from KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and w: National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
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Original:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a  Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300,  Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 and Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
Revised:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a w: Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300, Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 and Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
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Original:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a  Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300,  Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 and Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
Revised:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300, w: Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 and Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
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Original:  Many analysts have been predicting the introduction of music services by other wireless providers after Apple recently introduced the  Motorola ROKR.
Revised:  Many analysts have been predicting the introduction of music services by other wireless providers after Apple recently introduced the w: Motorola ROKR.
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Original:  Service for this phone in the USA is provided by  Cingular Wireless
Revised:  Service for this phone in the USA is provided by w: Cingular Wireless
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Original: Wireless provider Sprint announced today, that they would be working with w: RealNetworks to launch a streaming music service for Sprint wireless customers called Rhapsody Radio.
Revised: Wireless provider Sprint announced today, that they would be working with RealNetworks to launch a streaming music service for Sprint wireless customers called Rhapsody Radio.
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Original:  Selected streaming podcasts from w: KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and w: National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
Revised:  Selected streaming podcasts from KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and w: National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
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Original:  Selected streaming podcasts from w: KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and w: National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
Revised:  Selected streaming podcasts from w: KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
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Original:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a w: Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300, w: Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 and Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
Revised:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300, w: Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 and Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
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Original:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a w: Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300, w: Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 and Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
Revised:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a w: Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300, Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 and Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
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Original:  Many analysts have been predicting the introduction of music services by other wireless providers after Apple recently introduced the w: Motorola ROKR.
Revised:  Many analysts have been predicting the introduction of music services by other wireless providers after Apple recently introduced the Motorola ROKR.
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Original:  Service for this phone in the USA is provided by w: Cingular Wireless
Revised:  Service for this phone in the USA is provided by Cingular Wireless
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Original: This service allows users to listen to six streaming radio stations and podcasts from their mobile phone.
Revised: This service will allow users to listen to six streaming radio stations and podcasts from their mobile phone.
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Original:  Users would be able to listen to live broadcasts of these stations over their cellular connection.
Revised:  Users will be able to listen to live broadcasts of these stations over their cellular connection.
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Original:  For a monthly subscription fee of $6.95 users would have unlimited access to these commercial-free radio broadcasts.
Revised:  For a monthly subscription fee of $6.95 , users will also have unlimited access to these commercial-free radio broadcasts.
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Original:  For a monthly subscription fee of $6.95 users would have unlimited access to these commercial-free radio broadcasts.
Revised:  For a monthly subscription fee of $6.95 users would have unlimited access to commercial-free radio broadcasts.
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Original:  Selected streaming podcasts from KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available  A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
Revised:  Selected streaming podcasts from KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and National Public Radio’s Southern California station will also be available A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
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Original:  Selected streaming podcasts from KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available  A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
Revised:  Selected streaming podcasts from KCRW, Santa Monica 89.9 FM, and National Public Radio’s Southern California station would also be available . A special Beats N Breaks stream is also available.
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Original:  Beats N Breaks provides background music from hip-hop songs for users to rap along to .
Revised:  Beats N Breaks provides background music from hip-hop songs for users to rap with .
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Original: This service will allow users to listen to six streaming radio stations and podcasts from their mobile phone.
Revised: The service will allow users to listen to six streaming radio stations and podcasts from their mobile phone.
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Original:  Users will be able to listen to live broadcasts of these stations over their cellular connection.
Revised:  Users will be able to listen to live broadcasts of those stations over their cellular connection.
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Original:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300, Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 and Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
Revised:  Rhapsody Radio service requires a Sanyo MM-7400, Sanyo MM-5600, Sanyo MM-8300, Samsung IP-A790, Samsung MM-A800 , Samsung MM-A880 or an LG MM-535 mobile phone.
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Original:  Customers are able to order directly from their phones and the charge will show up on their next bill.
Revised:  Customers are able to order directly from their phones , with the charge will show up on their next bill.
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Original:  Customers are able to order directly from their phones and the charge will show up on their next bill.
Revised:  Customers are able to order directly from their phones and the charge will appearing on their next bill.
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Original:  Many analysts have been predicting the introduction of music services by other wireless providers after Apple recently introduced the Motorola ROKR.
Revised:  Many analysts predicted the introduction of music services by other wireless providers after Apple recently introduced the Motorola ROKR.
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Original: The service will allow users to listen to  six streaming radio stations (rap, hip-hop hits, alternative, country, '70s, and music news) and podcasts from their mobile phone.
Revised: The service will allow users to listen to six streaming radio stations (rap, hip-hop hits, alternative, country, '70s, and music news) from their mobile phone.
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Original:  Customers are able to order directly from their phones, with the charge will appearing on their next bill.
Revised:  Customers are able to order directly from their phones, with the charge appearing on their next bill.
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Original:  The Roman Catholic Church is growing faster in Africa than any other continen 
Revised:  The Roman Catholic Church is growing faster in Africa than any other continent. 
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Original:  It has been said that The Pope will deliver a guide to the Church of Africa to several Catholic leaders.
Revised:  It has been said that the Pope will deliver a guide to the Church of Africa to several Catholic leaders.
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Original:  More recently the Pope said that the use of condoms were morally justifiable in some occasions in the prevention of the spread of AID 
Revised:  More recently the Pope said that the use of condoms were morally justifiable in some occasions in the prevention of the spread of AIDS. 
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Original:  In 2011 he is set to visit Croatia, Spain and his homeland of Germany as well as Beni
Revised:  In 2011 he is set to visit Croatia, Spain and his homeland of Germany as well as Benin
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Original:  The Roman Catholic Church is growing faster in Africa than on any othercontinent .
Revised:  The Roman Catholic Church is growing faster than any other .
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Original:  The announcement was made by The Vatican on Friday .
Revised:  An announcement made by The Vatican on Friday .
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Original:  It has been said that the Pope will deliver a guide to the Church of Africa to several Catholic leaders.
Revised:  It has been said that the Pope will deliver guidance for the Church of Africa to several Catholic leaders.
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Original:  The document had previously been discussed at the synod of African Bishops in 2009.
Revised:  The document had been discussed at the synod of African Bishops in 2009.
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Original:  The document had previously been discussed at the synod of African Bishops in 2009.
Revised:  The document had previously been discussed at the synod of African Bishops last year.
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Original:  More recently the Pope said that the use of condoms were morally justifiable in some occasions in the prevention of the spread of AIDS . So far four visits have been announced for the Pope .
Revised:  More recently the Pope said that the use of condoms were morally justifiable in some circumstances to prevent spread of the disease . So far four visits have been announced for the Pope .
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Original:  Starting on November 18 next year, it will be his second Papal visit to the continent, where the Roman Catholic Church is growing faster than any other .
Revised:  Starting on November 18 next year, it will be his second Papal visit to the continent, where the Roman Catholic Church is growing fastest .
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Original: Hurricane Rita passes Florida on its way to Texas.
Revised: Hurricane Rita 
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Original:  Hurricane Rita prompted local Florida Keys officials to evacuate the area.
Revised:  prompted local Florida Keys officials to evacuate the area.
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Original: The storm may hit Southern Florida, then the US Gulf Coast ;
Revised: The storm may hit Southern Florida, then the US ;
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Original:  According to a brief article on Flashnews.com , Stevens blames the Japanese Yakuza mafia, who he says were attempting to manipulate futures markets via the natural disaster  
Revised:  According to a brief article on Flashnews.com . Stevens blames the Japanese Yakuza mafia, who he says were attempting to manipulate futures markets via the natural disaster 
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Original:  According to a brief article on Flashnews.com , Stevens blames the Japanese Yakuza mafia, who he says were attempting to manipulate futures markets via the natural disaster  
Revised:  According to a brief article on Flashnews.com , Stevens blames the Japanese Yakuza mafia, who he says were attempting to manipulate futures markets via the natural disaster . 
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Original:  According to a brief article on Flashnews.com . Stevens blames the Japanese Yakuza mafia, who he says were attempting to manipulate futures markets via the natural disaster.
Revised:  According to a brief article on Flashnews.com , Stevens blames the Japanese Yakuza mafia, who he says were attempting to manipulate futures markets via the natural disaster.
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Original:  Nielson was in Fort Lauderdale being treated for the illness at the time of his deat 
Revised:  Nielson was in Fort Lauderdale being treated for the illness at the time of his death. 
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Original:  One of his biggest apperences was in the 1980's disaster-parody Airplane!.
Revised:  One of his biggest appearences was in the 1980's disaster-parody Airplane!.
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Original:  After his appearence he gained more of a reputation as a comic acto 
Revised:  After his appearence he gained more of a reputation as a comic actor. 
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Original:  Leslie Nielsen is survived by his forth wife Barbaree Earl and his two daughters Maura Nielsen Kaplan and Thea Nielsen Disne
Revised:  Leslie Nielsen is survived by his forth wife Barbaree Earl and his two daughters Maura Nielsen Kaplan and Thea Nielsen Disney
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Original:  Nielson was in Fort Lauderdale being treated for the illness at the time of his death.
Revised:  Nielsen was in Fort Lauderdale being treated for the illness at the time of his death.
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Original:  Born on Febuary 11, 1926 in Regina Nielsen started his film career in the 1950's.
Revised:  Born February 11, 1926 in Regina Nielsen started his film career in the 1950's.
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Original:  One of his biggest appearences was in the 1980's disaster-parody Airplane!.
Revised:  One of his biggest appearances was in the 1980's disaster-parody Airplane!.
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Original:  After his appearence he gained more of a reputation as a comic actor.
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Original:  His most notable appearences however came in 1988 when he played Lt.
Revised:  One of his most notable roles came in 1988 when he played Lt.
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Original:  Leslie Nielsen is survived by his forth wife Barbaree Earl  and his two daughters  Maura Nielsen Kaplan and Thea Nielsen Disney
Revised:  Leslie Nielsen is survived by his forth wife Barbaree Earl , and his two daughters Maura Nielsen Kaplan and Thea Nielsen Disney
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Original:  Leslie Nielsen is survived by his forth wife Barbaree Earl, and his two daughters from his second marriage, Maura Nielsen Kaplan and Thea Nielsen Disney
Revised:  Leslie Nielsen is survived by his fourth wife Barbaree Earl, and his two daughters from his second marriage, Maura Nielsen Kaplan and Thea Nielsen Disney
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Original: An anti-war demonstration in the streets of New York City was broken up when organizers failed to apply for a sound permit, normally granted for public demonstrations of all kinds.
Revised: An anti-war demonstration in the streets of New York City failed to apply for a sound permit, normally granted for public demonstrations of all kinds.
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Original:  As a result of the unauthorized use of an amplification device, the New York Police Department took action prevent the sound equipment from being used .
Revised:  As a result of what police claim was an unauthorized use of an amplification device, the New York Police Department took action prevent the sound equipment from being used .
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Original:  As a result of the unauthorized use of an amplification device, the New York Police Department took action prevent the sound equipment from being used .
Revised:  As a result of the unauthorized use of an amplication device, the New York Police Department took action prevent the sound equipment from being used .
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Original:  As a result of the unauthorized use of an amplification device, the New York Police Department took action prevent the sound equipment from being used .
Revised:  As a result of the unauthorized use of an amplification device, the New York Police Department took action .
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Original:  As Sheehan was escorted off of the scene, the crowd shouted at the cops to "let her speak".
Revised:  As Sheehan was escorted off the scene, the crowd shouted at the cops to "let her speak".
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Original:  Mrs . Sheehan noted that this happened when police broke up the rally.
Revised:  Mrs Sheehan noted that this happened when police broke up the rally.
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Original:  The small afternoon demonstration drew only a dozen of supporters, and as many pro-war demonstrators joined the gathering.
Revised:  The small afternoon demonstration drew only a dozen supporters; and as many pro-war demonstrators joined the gathering.
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Original:  Sheehan achieved national prominence following her peace vigil at the beginning of August 2005, when she camped in a ditch by a road near United States President George W. Bush's ranch in Crawford, Texas, vowing to stay until the president agreed to meet and speak with her about the Iraq War
Revised:  Sheehan achieved national prominence following her peace vigil at the beginning of August 2005, when she camped in a ditch by a road near United States President George W. Bush's ranch in Crawford, Texas, vowing to stay until the President agreed to meet and speak with her about the Iraq War
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