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Original:  fl. late 27th century BCE ) was an Egyptian chancellor to the Pharaoh Djoser, probable architect of Djoser's step pyramid, and high priest of the sun god Ra at Heliopolis.
Revised:  fl. late 27th century BC ) was an Egyptian chancellor to the Pharaoh Djoser, probable architect of Djoser's step pyramid, and high priest of the sun god Ra at Heliopolis.
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Original:  fl. late 27th century BC ) was an Egyptian chancellor to the Pharaoh Djoser, probable architect of Djoser's step pyramid, and high priest of the sun god Ra at Heliopolis.
Revised:  fl. late 27th century BCE ) was an Egyptian chancellor to the Pharaoh Djoser, probable architect of Djoser's step pyramid, and high priest of the sun god Ra at Heliopolis.
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Original: Imhotep is among the few non-royal Egyptians who were deified after their deaths, and until the 21st century, he was thought to be only one of two commonersalong with Amenhotep, son of Haputo achieve this status.
Revised: Imhotep is among the few non-royal Egyptians who were deified after their deaths, and until the 21st century, he was one of nearly a dozen non-royals to achieve this status.
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Original:  In his 30s, He suffered a month long coma after a head injury, in which he lost his URL He spent nine months in the Naval Reserve in 1974–75, worked for Safeway grocery stores in Seattle, skinned road-kill in Colorado and tanned the hides, worked as a disc jockey near Steamboat Springs, Colorado, lived in a converted bookmobile in Shreveport, Louisiana, Tampa, Florida, and Atlanta, and then took a year to ride a tricycle to Austin in January 1996.
Revised:  In his 30s, he suffered a month long coma after a head injury, in which he lost his URL He spent nine months in the Naval Reserve in 1974–75, worked for Safeway grocery stores in Seattle, skinned road-kill in Colorado and tanned the hides, worked as a disc jockey near Steamboat Springs, Colorado, lived in a converted bookmobile in Shreveport, Louisiana, Tampa, Florida, and Atlanta, and then took a year to ride a tricycle to Austin in January 1996.
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Original: Albert Leslie Cochran (June 24, 1951March 8, 2012) was an American homeless man, peace activist, cross-dresser, urban outdoorsman  and outspoken critic of police treatment of the homeless.
Revised: Albert Leslie Cochran (June 24, 1951March 8, 2012) was an American homeless man, peace activist, cross-dresser, urban outdoorsman , and outspoken critic of police treatment of the homeless.
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Original:  Dubbed as "The Dean", he himself has laced his writing with nicknames given to various athletes, such as "Captain Lionheart" for Alvin Patrimonio and "Tower of Power" for Benjie Paras.
Revised:  Self-dubbed as "The Dean", he himself has laced his writing with nicknames given to various athletes, such as "Captain Lionheart" for Alvin Patrimonio and "Tower of Power" for Benjie Paras.
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Original: File:Sports5 - Quinito Henson - Magoo Marjon - 2015-1225.jpg|Quinito Henson (left) commentating the Manila Clasico game with Magoo Marjon on December 25, 2015.]] Joaquin M. Henson (born 1950), better known as Quinito Henson, is a Filipino sports analyst and television color commentator.
Revised: File:Sports5 - Quinito Henson - Magoo Marjon - 2015-1225.jpg|Quinito Henson (left) commentating the Manila Clasico game with Magoo Marjon on December 25, 2015.]] Joaquin M. Henson (born 1950), also known as Quinito Henson, is a Filipino sports analyst and television color commentator.
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Original:  Family background His wife Menchu was a commercial spokesperson featured in Philippine advertisements for Nestlé's Maggi product line.
Revised:  Personal life His wife Menchu was a commercial spokesperson featured in Philippine advertisements for Nestlé's Maggi product line.
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Original:  He is often paired on these broadcasts with the Sri Lankan-born blow-by-blow announcer Ronnie Nathanielsz.
Revised:  He is often paired on these broadcasts with the Sri Lankan-born Blow-by-Blow announcer Ronnie Nathanielsz.
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Original: Hull (Orona) Malden Island McKean Island Rawaki Island Starbuck Island Manra Island Vostok Island References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original: Hull (Orona) Malden Island McKean Island Rawaki Island Starbuck Island Manra Island Vostok Island References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
Revised: Hull (Orona) Malden Island McKean Island Rawaki Island Starbuck Island Manra Island Vostok Island %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original: Text of the Treaty United Nations, Treaty Series, #28230 This, together with British cessation of claims, ended the Canton and Enderbury Islands condominium .
Revised: Text of the Treaty United Nations, Treaty Series, #28230 This, together with British cessation of claims, ended the Canton and Enderbury Islands Condominium .
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Original:  Pauline and Emmanuela .
Revised:  Pauline and Emmanuel .
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Original: Betty Oyella Bigombe, also known as Betty Atuku Bigombe (born 21 October 1952), is the Senior Director for Fragility, Conflict, and Violence at the World Bank .
Revised: Betty Oyella Bigombe, also known as Betty Atuku Bigombe (born 21 October 1952), served as the Senior Director for Fragility, Conflict, and Violence at the World Bank .
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Original:  In May 2011, she was appointed by President Yoweri Museveni as State Minister for Water Resources, a position that she held until June 2014, when she resigned to take up her current assignment at the World Bank .
Revised:  In May 2011, she was appointed by President Yoweri Museveni as State Minister for Water Resources, a position that she held until June 2014, when she resigned to take up her assignment at the World Bank .
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Original:  In May 2011, she was appointed by President Yoweri Museveni as State Minister for Water Resources, a position that she held until June 2014, when she resigned to take up her assignment at the World Bank , she left in 2017.
Revised:  In May 2011, she was appointed by President Yoweri Museveni as State Minister for Water Resources, a position that she held until June 2014, when she resigned to take up her assignment at the World Bank .
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Original: World Bank people Category:Members of the Parliament of Uganda Category:Ugandan expatriates in the United States Category:Women government ministers of Uganda Category:21st-century women politicians Category:20th-century  women politicians Category:Women members of the Parliament of Uganda Category:Ugandan officials of the United Nations Category:Harvard Institute for International Development Category:People educated at Trinity College Nabbingo Category:People educated at Gayaza High Scho
Revised: World Bank people Category:Members of the Parliament of Uganda Category:Ugandan expatriates in the United States Category:Women government ministers of Uganda Category:21st-century women politicians Category:20th-century Ugandan women politicians Category:Women members of the Parliament of Uganda Category:Ugandan officials of the United Nations Category:Harvard Institute for International Development Category:People educated at Trinity College Nabbingo Category:People educated at Gayaza High Scho
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Original: Members of the Parliament of Uganda Category:Ugandan expatriates in the United States Category:Women government ministers of Uganda Category:21st-century  women politicians Category:20th-century Ugandan women politicians Category:Women members of the Parliament of Uganda Category:Ugandan officials of the United Nations Category:Harvard Institute for International Development Category:People educated at Trinity College Nabbingo Category:People educated at Gayaza High Scho
Revised: Members of the Parliament of Uganda Category:Ugandan expatriates in the United States Category:Women government ministers of Uganda Category:21st-century Ugandan women politicians Category:20th-century Ugandan women politicians Category:Women members of the Parliament of Uganda Category:Ugandan officials of the United Nations Category:Harvard Institute for International Development Category:People educated at Trinity College Nabbingo Category:People educated at Gayaza High Scho
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Original:  File:Darth Vader - Plastfigur - 1987.jpg|Darth Vader, a popular plastic toy for boys in the 80's .
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Original:  Gender Role Stereotypes, Expectancy Effects, and Parents' Socialization of Gender Differences, Jacquelynne S. Eccles, Janis E. Jacob, Rena D. Harold, 14 April 2010 Researcher Susan Witt said that parents are the primary influencer on the gender roles of their children.
Revised:  Researcher Susan Witt said that parents are the primary influencer on the gender roles of their children.
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Original:  Newer forms of toys include interactive digital entertainment , virtual reality, and the smart toy .
Revised:  Newer forms of toys include interactive digital entertainment and smart toys .
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Original:  The concept of using technology in a way that bridges the digital with the physical world, providing unique interactive experiences for the user has also been referred to as "Phygital. "
Revised:  The concept of using technology in a way that bridges the digital with the physical world, providing unique interactive experiences for the user has also been referred to as phygital.
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Original: alt=Fetal Heart Rate and Activity Monitor - Baby Doppler |Fetal Heart Rate and Activity Monitor - Baby Doppler A Doppler fetal monitor is a hand-held ultrasound transducer used to detect the fetal heartbeat for prenatal care.
Revised:  A Doppler fetal monitor is a hand-held ultrasound transducer used to detect the fetal heartbeat for prenatal care.
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Original: Types alt=Fetal Heart Rate and Activity Monitor - Baby Doppler |Fetal Heart Rate and Activity Monitor - Baby Doppler Dopplers for home or hospital use differ in the following ways: Manufacturer: popular manufacturers are Neeva Baby, Baby Doppler, Sonoline, Ultrasound Technologies, Newman Medical, Nicolet (purchased by Natus), Arjo-Huntleigh, and Summit Doppler (now Cooper Surgical).
Revised: Types alt=Fetal Heart Rate and Activity Monitor - Baby Doppler |Fetal Heart Rate and Activity Monitor - Baby Doppler Dopplers for home or hospital use differ in the following ways: Manufacturer: popular manufacturers Baby Doppler, Sonoline, Ultrasound Technologies, Newman Medical, Nicolet (purchased by Natus), Arjo-Huntleigh, and Summit Doppler (now Cooper Surgical).
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Original: The Tielman Brothers was the first Dutch East Indies (Dutch-Indo) band to successfully venture into the international music scene in the 1950s.
Revised: The Tielman Brothers was the first Indonesian band to successfully venture into the international music scene in the 1950s.
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Original:   History The founders of the band are the children of Herman Tielman from Kupang and Flora Lorine Hess . Although not the first band, the Tielman Brothers were at the forefront of what was later called the Indorock scene.in Driwan Music Record Cybernuseun The Legend George De Fretes Music Record 1950s In   1958 the band were part of the Dutch pavilion at the Brussels World Fair.
Revised:  History The founders of the band are the children of Herman Tielman from Kupang and Flora Lorine Hess . Although not the first band, the Tielman Brothers were at the forefront of what was later called the Indorock scene.in Driwan Music Record Cybernuseun The Legend George De Fretes Music Record 1950s In In 1958 the band were part of the Dutch pavilion at the Brussels World Fair.
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Original: American Studies in a Moment of Danger George Lipsitz Page 310   1960s In 1966, they were &  joined by George de Fretes  who was with them for a short period of time.
Revised: American Studies in a Moment of Danger George Lipsitz Page 310 1960s In 1966, they were & joined by George de Fretes , who was with them for a short period of time.
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Original: Bluesharmonica.nl Hawaiian muziek met o.a de Kilima Hawaiians en George de Fretes, DEEL 2: ref>Bluesharmonica.nl Hawaiian muziek met o.a de Kilima Hawaiians en George de Fretes, DEEL 2: The Power Of Indonesia The Tielman Brothers, The greatest Indorock legend   Later years In later years, the Tielman Brothers moved to Australia.
Revised: Bluesharmonica.nl Hawaiian muziek met o.a de Kilima Hawaiians en George de Fretes, DEEL 2: The Power Of Indonesia The Tielman Brothers, The greatest Indorock legend Later years In later years, the Tielman Brothers moved to Australia.
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Original:  Retreived 26 Sepember 2018.
Revised:  Retrieved 26 Sepember 2018.
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Original:  Their performances were noted because of their spectacular stage act, which included the throwing of guitars .Van der Plas, Jan (2003).
Revised:  Their performances were noted because of their spectacular stage act, which included guitar tossing .Van der Plas, Jan (2003).
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Original:  Retrieved 26 Sepember 2018.
Revised:  Retrieved 26 September 2018.
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Original: Tielman Brothers tour poster 1985 The Tielman Brothers was the first Indonesian band to successfully venture into the international music scene in the 1950s.
Revised:  The Tielman Brothers was the first Indonesian band to successfully venture into the international music scene in the 1950s.
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Original: The main layout applications for this workflow are: Datalogics Pager, Adobe FrameMaker / InDesign, QuarkXPress, Xyvision and Arbortext Advanced Print Publisher (formerly 3B2)  . Generally, these layout applications have a corresponding server version, which receives commands via web interfaces rather than desktop interaction.
Revised: The main layout applications for this workflow are: Datalogics Pager, Adobe FrameMaker / InDesign, QuarkXPress, Xyvision , Arbortext Advanced Print Publisher (formerly 3B2) . Generally, these layout applications have a corresponding server version, which receives commands via web interfaces rather than desktop interaction.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Desktop publishing Dynamic publishing Variable data printing Web-to-print Category:Reporting software Category:Direct marketing Category:Publishing Category:Workflow technology Category:Databas
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Desktop publishing Dynamic publishing Variable data printing Web-to-print Category:Reporting software Category:Direct marketing Category:Publishing Category:Workflow technology Category:Databas
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Desktop publishing Dynamic publishing Variable data printing Web-to-print 
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Original: Another model of database publishing is found in many Web-to-Print solutions where users browse templates from an online catalog ( e.g. Business Cards, Brochures, etc. ), personalize the selected template by filling in a form and then view the rendered result.
Revised: Another model of database publishing is found in many web-to-print sites where users browse templates from an online catalog ( e.g. Business Cards, Brochures, etc. ), personalize the selected template by filling in a form and then view the rendered result.
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Original: Another model of database publishing is found in many Web-to-Print solutions where users browse templates from an online catalog ( e.g. Business Cards, Brochures, etc. ), personalize the selected template by filling in a form and then view the rendered result.
Revised: Another model of database publishing is found in many Web-to-Print solutions where users browse templates from an online catalog ( such as business cards or brochures ), personalize the selected template by filling in a form and then view the rendered result.
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Original:  These applications make their broad spectrum of features available for extension and integration with vertical solutions , that can be developed either internally, through some form of scripting (e.g. JavaScript or AppleScript for InDesign), or externally, through some API and corresponding developer kits . Numerous developers have created complete or partial vertical solutions around the rendering capabilities of the server applications .
Revised:  These applications make their broad spectrum of features available for extension and integration with vertical products , that can be developed either internally, through some form of scripting (e.g. JavaScript or AppleScript for InDesign), or externally, through some API and corresponding developer kits . Numerous developers have created complete or partial vertical solutions around the rendering capabilities of the server applications .
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Original: Database publishing is an area of automated media production in which specialized techniques are used to generate paginated documents from source data residing in traditional databases . Common examples are mail order catalogues, direct marketing, report generation, price lists and telephone directories.
Revised: Database publishing is fake . Common examples are mail order catalogues, direct marketing, report generation, price lists and telephone directories.
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Original: Davicion Bally (born Bucharest Jan. 29, 1809 ;
Revised: Davicion Bally (born January 29, 1809 ;
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Original:  New York. organization of cognitive functions in the brain as well as in cognitive psychology of Baddeley, Estes, Posner and other contemporary psychologist .
Revised:  New York. organization of cognitive functions in the brain as well as in cognitive psychology of Baddeley, Estes, Posner and other contemporary psychologists .
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Original:  Expressive attention (a variation of the Stroop test) has two forms, one for children 7 years and younger, and the other 8%DIFDELCMD < & %%% over.
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Original: Planning Scale Planning helps us select or develop strategies needed to complete tasks for which a solution is needed, and is critical to all activities where an individual has to determine how to solve a problem The Planning scale includes matching numbers, planned codes, and planned connections.
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Original: koolaid Attention Scale Attention is a mental process that involves focusing on selected aspects of external events, internal events, or stimuli.
Revised:  Attention Scale Attention is a mental process that involves focusing on selected aspects of external events, internal events, or stimuli.
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Original:  Along with terms like moron, imbecile, and cretin, it is archaic and offensive in those uses .
Revised:  Along with terms like moron, imbecile, and cretin, it is archaic and considered to be offensive .
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Original:  The term was gradually replaced by the term profound mental retardation (which has itself since been replaced by other terms).
Revised:  The term was gradually replaced by the term profound mental retardation (which itself has since been replaced by other terms).
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Original: Etymology The word "idiot" comes from the Greek noun idiōtēs 'a private person, individual' (as opposed to the state), 'a private citizen' (as opposed to someone with a political office), 'a common man', 'a person lacking professional skill, layman', later 'unskilled', 'ignorant', derived from the adjective idios 'personal' (not public, not shared) , 'one's own' .J. Diggle, ed., The Cambridge Greek Lexicon, 2021, , s.v., p. 702Liddell-Scott-Jones A Greek–English Lexicon, s.v. and .
Revised: Etymology The word "idiot" comes from the Greek noun idiōtēs 'a private person, individual' (as opposed to the state), 'a private citizen' (as opposed to someone with a political office), 'a common man', 'a person lacking professional skill, layman', later 'unskilled', 'ignorant', derived from the adjective idios 'personal' (not public, not shared) .J. Diggle, ed., The Cambridge Greek Lexicon, 2021, , s.v., p. 702Liddell-Scott-Jones A Greek–English Lexicon, s.v. and .
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Original:  Along with terms like moron, imbecile, and cretin, its use to describe people with mental disabilities is  archaic and offensive.
Revised:  Along with terms like moron, imbecile, and cretin, its use to describe people with mental disabilities is considered archaic and offensive.
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Original:  1884 His second daughter was born on Sydney Island, and named for the island ." Some recent PMB Manuscripts Series Microfilms, PMB 1227 Arundel Family Papers, 1803–1935.", Pacific Manuscripts Bureau Newsletter, series 5, n°20, December 2005, page 10 1885, 3 March.
Revised:  1884 His second daughter was born on Sydney Island, and was named Sydney ." Some recent PMB Manuscripts Series Microfilms, PMB 1227 Arundel Family Papers, 1803–1935.", Pacific Manuscripts Bureau Newsletter, series 5, n°20, December 2005, page 10 1885, 3 March.
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Original: Portrait ans signature of John Arundel, 1845 John T. Arundel (1 September 1841 – 30 November 1919) was an English entrepreneur who was instrumental in the development of the mining of phosphate rock on the Pacific islands of Nauru and Banaba (Ocean Island).
Revised:  John T. Arundel (1 September 1841 – 30 November 1919) was an English entrepreneur who was instrumental in the development of the mining of phosphate rock on the Pacific islands of Nauru and Banaba (Ocean Island).
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Original: The PIC continued to expand its plantation interests and in 1899, acquired a license to develop coconut plantations on Birnie Island, which is geographically part of the Phoenix Islands and is part of Kiribati, with the PIC  acquiring licenses to develop coconut plantations in the Solomon Islands.
Revised: The PIC continued to expand its plantation interests and in 1899, acquired a license to develop coconut plantations on Birnie Island, which is geographically part of the Phoenix Islands and is part of Kiribati, with the PIC attempting ti acquiring licenses to develop coconut plantations in the Solomon Islands.
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Original:  Following their marriage Lillie Arundel would travel into the central Pacific with J.T. Arundel when he would visit the various islands on which his company has operations.
Revised:  Following their marriage Lillie Arundel would travel into the central Pacific with J.T. Arundel when he would visit the various islands on which his company had operations.
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Original: Periplus of the Erythraean Sea, §16 The Periplus also states that the city and port were ruled by some Arabian vassals of the Himyarite kingdom, particularly a certain leader who it names as a “ Mapharitic chieftain.”
Revised: Periplus of the Erythraean Sea, §16 The Periplus also states that the city and port were ruled by South Arabian vassals of the Himyarite kingdom, particularly a certain leader who it names as a “ Mapharitic chieftain.”
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Original: Periplus of the Erythraean Sea, §16 The Periplus also states that the city and port were ruled by South Arabian vassals of the Himyarite kingdom, particularly a certain leader who it names as a “ Mapharitic chieftain.”
Revised: Periplus of the Erythraean Sea, §16 The Periplus also states that the city and port were ruled by South Arabian vassals of the Himyarite kingdom, particularly a certain “ Mapharitic chieftain.”
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