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Original: Media organisations have reported that the 69-year-old man killed his five year old grand daughter by drowning , her seven year old brother was killed by a blunt force trauma to the back of the head, and his wife was killed by multiple axe wounds to her body , including her head.
Revised: Media organisations have reported that the 69-year-old man killed his five year old grand daughter by drowning , her seven year old brother was killed by a blunt force trauma to the back of the head, and his wife was killed by multiple axe wounds to her body - including her head.
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Original:  New South Wales Police could not confirm the post-mortem examination with police saying that the results of the post-mortem examination are not expected to be finalised for a couple of days and also may not be immediately made public.
Revised:  New South Wales Police could not confirm the post-mortem examination , saying that the results of the post-mortem examination are not expected to be finalised for a couple of days and also may not be immediately made public.
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Original:  New South Wales Police could not confirm the post-mortem examination with police saying that the results of the post-mortem examination are not expected to be finalised for a couple of days and also may not be immediately made public.
Revised:  New South Wales Police could not confirm the post-mortem examination with police saying that the results of the post-mortem examination are not expected to be finalised for a couple of days and may not be immediately made public.
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Original:  The 69-year-old grandfather who faced Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008  was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder  is currently in a special holding cell on 24 hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre and due to appear in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
Revised:  The 69-year-old man, who went before Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008 was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder is currently in a special holding cell on 24 hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre and due to appear in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
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Original:  The 69-year-old grandfather who faced Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008  was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder  is currently in a special holding cell on 24 hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre and due to appear in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
Revised:  The 69-year-old grandfather who faced Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008 , was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder is currently in a special holding cell on 24 hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre and due to appear in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
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Original:  The 69-year-old grandfather who faced Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008  was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder  is currently in a special holding cell on 24 hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre and due to appear in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
Revised:  The 69-year-old grandfather who faced Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008 was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder . He is currently in a special holding cell on 24 hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre and due to appear in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
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Original:  The 69-year-old grandfather who faced Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008  was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder  is currently in a special holding cell on 24 hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre and due to appear in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
Revised:  The 69-year-old grandfather who faced Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008 was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder is currently in a special holding cell on 24-hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre and due to appear in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
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Original:  The 69-year-old grandfather who faced Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008  was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder  is currently in a special holding cell on 24 hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre and due to appear in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
Revised:  The 69-year-old grandfather who faced Deniliquin Local Court on July 1, 2008 was refused bail and charged with three counts of murder and one count of attempted murder is currently in a special holding cell on 24 hour watch at the Junee Correctional Centre . A further appearance is due in Wagga Wagga Local Court via an audio-visual link on July 7, 2008.
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Original: A 69-year-old grandfather , who cannot be named for legal reasons, stands accused of murdering three victims in the small New South Wales town of Cowra.
Revised:  69-year-old grandfather , who cannot be named for legal reasons, stands accused of murdering three victims in the small New South Wales town of Cowra.
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Original:  The study said that it aimed to "investigate UK children's perceptions of the biodiversity and ecology of rainforest environments," by evaluating "children's perceptions by assessing their drawings of rainforests.  
Revised:  The study said that it aimed to "investigate UK children's perceptions of the biodiversity and ecology of rainforest environments," by evaluating "children's perceptions by assessing their drawings of rainforests. " 
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Original:  This is despite the fact that these species have the greatest effect on the rainforest  
Revised:  This is despite the fact that these species have the greatest effect on the rainforest . 
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Original:  The disaster involved a Concorde crash on July 25, 2000 near Charles de Gaulle International Airport, Paris, France that killed all 109 on board and four more on the ground   
Revised:  The disaster involved a Concorde crash on July 25, 2000 near Charles de Gaulle International Airport, Paris, France that killed all 109 on board and four more on the ground . 
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Original:  Head of maintenance Stanley Ford is being charged for allowing the part to be modified by Taylor without clearing the changes properly, and the airline is charged for allowing the widebodied passenger jet back into the air and having failed to maintain it adequatly  
Revised:  Head of maintenance Stanley Ford is being charged for allowing the part to be modified by Taylor without clearing the changes properly, and the airline is charged for allowing the widebodied passenger jet back into the air and having failed to maintain it adequatly . 
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Original:  Henri Perrier, head of the initial Concorde programme at Aerospatiale, Jacques Herubel, Concorde chief engineer at the time and Claude Frantzen, ex-head of technical services at the French civil aviation authority are all facing charges  
Revised:  Henri Perrier, head of the initial Concorde programme at Aerospatiale, Jacques Herubel, Concorde chief engineer at the time and Claude Frantzen, ex-head of technical services at the French civil aviation authority are all facing charges . 
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Original:  The charges are all mostly negligent manslaughter charges.
Revised:  The charges are primarily for involuntary manslaughter charges.
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Original:  The charges are primarily for involuntary manslaughter charges .
Revised:  The charges are primarily for involuntary manslaughter .
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Original:  Ernesto Unabia was one of seventy confirmed fatalities in the disaster, which left eighty more missing   
Revised:  Ernesto Unabia was one of seventy confirmed fatalities in the disaster, which left eighty more missing . 
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Original:  Princess of the Orient had struck the bottom of Manila's North Harbour, sideswiped a container ship and suffered a criplling engine fire while berthed at North Harbour, being towed first to Cebu and ultimatly Singapore for repairs   
Revised:  Princess of the Orient had struck the bottom of Manila's North Harbour, sideswiped a container ship and suffered a cripling engine fire while berthed at North Harbour, being towed first to Cebu and ultimatly Singapore for repairs 
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Original:  Princess of the Orient had struck the bottom of Manila's North Harbour, sideswiped a container ship and suffered a criplling engine fire while berthed at North Harbour, being towed first to Cebu and ultimatly Singapore for repairs   
Revised:  Princess of the Orient had struck the bottom of Manila's North Harbour, sideswiped a container ship and suffered a criplling engine fire while berthed at North Harbour, being towed first to Cebu and ultimatly Singapore for repairs . 
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Original:  He remains missing to this day   
Revised:  He remains missing to this day . 
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Original:  Princess of the Orient had struck the bottom of Manila's North Harbour, sideswiped a container ship and suffered a cripling engine fire while berthed at North Harbour, being towed first to Cebu and ultimatly Singapore for repairs.
Revised:  Princess of the Orient had struck the bottom of Manila's North Harbour, sideswiped a container ship and suffered a crippling engine fire while berthed at North Harbour, being towed first to Cebu and ultimatly Singapore for repairs.
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Original:  Princess of the Orient had struck the bottom of Manila's North Harbour, sideswiped a container ship and suffered a cripling engine fire while berthed at North Harbour, being towed first to Cebu and ultimatly Singapore for repairs.
Revised:  Princess of the Orient had struck the bottom of Manila's North Harbour, sideswiped a container ship and suffered a cripling engine fire while berthed at North Harbour, being towed first to Cebu and ultimately Singapore for repairs.
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Original:  A Board of Marine Inquiry (BMI) investigation into the ultimate sinking of the Princess of the Orient would later say that Suplicio did not have enough initiative to take action against him.
Revised:  A Board of Marine Inquiry (BMI) investigation into the ultimate sinking of the Princess of the Orient would later say that Sulpicio did not have enough initiative to take action against him.
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Original:  Sulpicio further alledged that careful analysis of the BMI report showed he did not directly cause the disaster.
Revised:  Sulpicio further alleged that careful analysis of the BMI report showed he did not directly cause the disaster.
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Original:  Opsahl also suggested that the ruling was in violation of Federal law, specifically the Video Privacy Protection Act.
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Original:  Polish Prime Minister Donald Tusk and Czech Republic President Vaclav Klaus have said they will not attend the opening ceremony as a political protest.
Revised:  Polish Prime Minister Donald Tusk and Czech Republic President Vaclav Klaus have said they will boycott the opening ceremony as a political protest.
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Original:  British Prime Minister Gordon Brown says that he will not attend the opening, but he will be at the closing   .
Revised:  British Prime Minister Gordon Brown says that he will not attend the opening, but he will be at the closing . .
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Original: The visit will be part of an August trip to China, South Korea, and Thailand, where he will discuss issues such as bilateral relations, US-Korean trade and North Korea's nuclear program.
Revised: The visit will be part of an August trip to China, South Korea, and Thailand, where he will discuss issues such as bilateral relations, U.S.-Korean trade and North Korea's nuclear program.
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Original:  However, the NTSB also said that initial investigations have revealed no evidence of a bomb or an incendiary device  
Revised:  However, the NTSB also said that initial investigations have revealed no evidence of a bomb or an incendiary device . 
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Original:  Both have been interviewed by the NTSB, and the Cockpit Voice Recorder and Flight Data Recorder have both been sent to Washington where they are being analysed at the NTSB's headquarters   
Revised:  Both have been interviewed by the NTSB, and the Cockpit Voice Recorder and Flight Data Recorder have both been sent to Washington where they are being analysed at the NTSB's headquarters . 
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Original:  Under International Civil Aviation Organization (ICAO) Annex 13 other firms involved with the aircraft, such as Boeing and ABX, will also be party to the investigation  
Revised:  Under International Civil Aviation Organization (ICAO) Annex 13 other firms involved with the aircraft, such as Boeing and ABX, will also be party to the investigation . 
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Original: Image:ABX Fire.jpg|The damaged airliner, which was in DHL Aviation livery As part of an update by the United States National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) into its investigation of a fire on a Boeing 767 cargo plane at San Francisco International Airport last week, it has been revealed the operator received a threat the week before.
Revised:  As part of an update by the United States National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) into its investigation of a fire on a Boeing 767 cargo plane at San Francisco International Airport last week, it has been revealed the operator received a threat the week before.
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Original: Image:ABX Fire.jpg|The damaged airliner, which was in DHL Aviation livery As part of an update by the United States National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) into its investigation of a fire on a Boeing 767 cargo plane at San Francisco International Airport last week, it has been revealed the operator received a threat the week before.
Revised: Image:ABX Fire.jpg|The damaged airliner, which was in DHL Aviation livery 
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Original:  The NTSB expects the on-scene portion of the investigation to be completed by July 6.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Related new
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Original: Over 60 members of a Chadian sect have been killed in fighting with police that started after the groups leader announced his wish to start a holy war.
Revised: Over 60 members of a Chadian sect have been killed in fighting with police that started after the group's leader announced his wish to start a holy war.
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Original:  The government security minister, Mahamat Bachir, said that the death toll is "a regrettable toll, but we think we now control the situation caused by the actions carried out by these terrorists, these extremists.  
Revised:  The government security minister, Mahamat Bachir, said that the death toll is "a regrettable toll, but we think we now control the situation caused by the actions carried out by these terrorists, these extremists. " 
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Original:  As a result of this, he was arrested  
Revised:  As a result of this, he was arrested . 
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Original:  In addition to the deaths from the sect, over 50 members of the group were also injured  [ 
Revised:  In addition to the deaths from the sect, over 50 members of the group were also injured . [ 
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Original:  "Since June 3, he [the leader of the group] has been calling on all Muslims to prepare to engage in a holy war against Christians and atheists, saying that the war would be launched from Chad to as far as Denmark," said the offical  
Revised:  "Since June 3, he [the leader of the group] has been calling on all Muslims to prepare to engage in a holy war against Christians and atheists, saying that the war would be launched from Chad to as far as Denmark," said the offical . 
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Original:  Former United States senator from North Carolina Jesse Helms has died today at the age of 86 after a long batter with vascular dementia.
Revised:  Former United States senator from North Carolina Jesse Helms has died today at the age of 86 after a long battle with vascular dementia.
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Original: In 2002, Helms received the Clare Boothe Luce Award  which is the foundation's highest award.
Revised: In 2002, Helms received the Clare Boothe Luce Award , which is the foundation's highest award.
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Original:   "[Helms is] dedicated, unflinching and articulate advocate of conservative policy and principle , " stated the Foundation
Revised:  The Foundation stated, "[Helms is] dedicated, unflinching and articulate advocate of conservative policy and principle , " stated the Foundation
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Original:   "[Helms is] dedicated, unflinching and articulate advocate of conservative policy and principle , " stated the Foundation
Revised:  "[Helms is] dedicated, unflinching and articulate advocate of conservative policy and principle . " stated the Foundation
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Original: The logo of the Chinese Wikipedia According to reports, the government of People's Republic of China has stopped restricting access to the Chinese Wikipedia in some parts of the country starting on July 3.
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Original:  "We have not changed our assessment that A.Q. Khan was a very major and dangerous proliferator," an unnamed U.S. official said  
Revised:  "We have not changed our assessment that A.Q. Khan was a very major and dangerous proliferator," an unnamed U.S. official said . 
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Original: Khan previously claimed that he was involved in supplying nuclear technology to North Korea, but he now denies it.
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Original:  For nearly half a century the world's largest telescope, the Arecibo Observatory in Arecibo, Puerto Rico, has been observing the our solar system and the universe around it.
Revised:  For nearly half a century the world's largest telescope, the Arecibo Observatory in Arecibo, Puerto Rico, has been observing our solar system and the universe around it.
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Original:  Its main purposes are radio astronomy, aeronomy and radar astronomy, but is probably most famous for its continuing use to search for and  communicate with extraterrestrial life outside our solar system and beyond.
Revised:  Its main purposes are radio astronomy, aeronomy and radar astronomy, but is probably most famous for its continuing use to search for and attempt to communicate with extraterrestrial life outside our solar system and beyond.
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Original:  In an in depth exclusive report, Wikinews examined how much  the observatory's budget was at risk  and what the possible outcomes could be for the programs currently relying on Arecibo as their main research tool.
Revised:  In an in depth exclusive report, Wikinews examined how much of the observatory's budget was at risk and what the possible outcomes could be for the programs currently relying on Arecibo as their main research tool.
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Original:  In an in depth exclusive report, Wikinews examined how much  the observatory's budget was at risk  and what the possible outcomes could be for the programs currently relying on Arecibo as their main research tool.
Revised:  In an in depth exclusive report, Wikinews examined how much the observatory's budget was at risk , and what the possible outcomes could be for the programs currently relying on Arecibo as their main research tool.
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Original:  Wikinews also spoke to several individuals closely affiliated with projects and facilities who use significant time at the observatory.
Revised:  Wikinews spoke to several individuals closely affiliated with projects and facilities who use significant time at the observatory.
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Original:  He calls for more support of bill H.R. 3737 to continue Arecibo's science, and SETI@home urges individuals to write to congress to show support for the bill.
Revised:  He calls for more support of bill H.R. 3737 to continue Arecibo's science, and SETI@home urges individuals to write to Congress to show support for the bill.
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Original:  Wikinews contacted the NSF for a statement, but a Dan MacMillan directed to us to the Committee's report.
Revised:  Wikinews contacted the NSF for a statement, but a Dan MacMillan directed us to the Committee's report.
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Original:  In an attempt to cover the budget shortfall Arecibo faces, Don Campbell, Professor of Astronomy at Cornell's Department of Astronomy  who specializes in radio and radar astronomy  tells Wikinews that the university is looking at all possible sources of funding to keep Arecibo open.
Revised:  In an attempt to cover the budget shortfall Arecibo faces, Don Campbell, Professor of Astronomy at Cornell's Department of Astronomy , who specializes in radio and radar astronomy tells Wikinews that the university is looking at all possible sources of funding to keep Arecibo open.
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Original:  In an attempt to cover the budget shortfall Arecibo faces, Don Campbell, Professor of Astronomy at Cornell's Department of Astronomy  who specializes in radio and radar astronomy  tells Wikinews that the university is looking at all possible sources of funding to keep Arecibo open.
Revised:  In an attempt to cover the budget shortfall Arecibo faces, Don Campbell, Professor of Astronomy at Cornell's Department of Astronomy who specializes in radio and radar astronomy , tells Wikinews that the university is looking at all possible sources of funding to keep Arecibo open.
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Original:  "Arecibo is also, of course, the source of the data that is processed by all the volunteers working with the seti @home project.
Revised:  "Arecibo is also, of course, the source of the data that is processed by all the volunteers working with the SETI @home project.
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Original:  Given its relatively small operating budget, closing Arecibo makes no sense," added Campbell  
Revised:  Given its relatively small operating budget, closing Arecibo makes no sense," added Campbell . 
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Original:  After 10 minutes of hot dog eating, 2 less than in previous years, Chestnut and Kobayashi were tied at 59 frankfurters.
Revised:  After ten minutes of hot dog eating, 2 less than in previous years, Chestnut and Kobayashi were tied at 59 frankfurters.
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Original:  After 10 minutes of hot dog eating, 2 less than in previous years, Chestnut and Kobayashi were tied at 59 frankfurters.
Revised:  After 10 minutes of hot dog eating, two shorter than in previous years, Chestnut and Kobayashi were tied at 59 frankfurters.
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Original:  But after the rare tiebreaker, 24 year old Chestnut emerged as the winner, claiming a $10,000 prize and a mustard-yellow belt.
Revised:  But after the rare tiebreaker, 24-year-old Chestnut emerged as the winner, claiming a $10,000 prize and a mustard-yellow belt.
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Original:  You can't overcomplicate it." Kobayashi, whose loss last year shattered a 6 year winning streak, said that a sore jaw and a tooth problem may have altered his performance.
Revised:  You can't overcomplicate it." Kobayashi, whose loss last year shattered a six-year winning streak, said that a sore jaw and a tooth problem may have altered his performance.
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Original:  "If I put one more mouthful in, I could've won", the 30 year old Nagano native said through a translator.
Revised:  "If I put one more mouthful in, I could've won", the 30-year-old Nagano native said through a translator.
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