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Original:  NRC (Dutch Newspaper) – Biography review by Locher-Scholten, E. P.1
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Original: Activation Further information: Autoregulation center|700px|RAAS schematic The system can be activated when there is a loss of blood volume or a drop in blood pressure (such as in hemorrhage or dehydration).
Revised: Activation center|700px|RAAS schematic The system can be activated when there is a loss of blood volume or a drop in blood pressure (such as in hemorrhage or dehydration).
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Original:  Cardiovascular effectsFurther reading: Angiotensin effects and Aldosterone function'' 350px |Renal hormone regulation schematic
Revised:  Cardiovascular effects 350px |Renal hormone regulation schematic
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Original: Fetal renin–angiotensin system In the fetus, the renin–angiotensin system is predominantly a sodium-losing system, as angiotensin II has little or no effect on aldosterone levels.
Revised: Foetal renin–angiotensin system In the fetus, the renin–angiotensin system is predominantly a sodium-losing system, as angiotensin II has little or no effect on aldosterone levels.
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Original: Foetal renin–angiotensin system In the fetus  , the renin–angiotensin system is predominantly a sodium-losing system, as angiotensin II has little or no effect on aldosterone levels.
Revised: Foetal renin–angiotensin system In the fetus (or foetus) , the renin–angiotensin system is predominantly a sodium-losing system, as angiotensin II has little or no effect on aldosterone levels.
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Original: Foetal renin–angiotensin system In the fetus (or foetus) , the renin–angiotensin system is predominantly a sodium-losing system, as angiotensin II has little or no effect on aldosterone levels.
Revised: Fetal renin–angiotensin system In the fetus (or foetus) , the renin–angiotensin system is predominantly a sodium-losing system, as angiotensin II has little or no effect on aldosterone levels.
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Original: Foetal renin–angiotensin system In the fetus (or foetus) , the renin–angiotensin system is predominantly a sodium-losing system, as angiotensin II has little or no effect on aldosterone levels.
Revised: Foetal renin–angiotensin system In the fetus , the renin–angiotensin system is predominantly a sodium-losing system, as angiotensin II has little or no effect on aldosterone levels.
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Original:  Renin activates the renin–angiotensin system by cleaving angiotensinogen, produced by the liver, to yield angiotensin I, which is further converted into angiotensin II by ACE, the angiotensin–converting enzyme primarily within the capillaries of the lungs.
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Original:  Angiotensin II increases blood pressure by stimulating the Gq protein in vascular smooth muscle cells (which in turn activates an IP3-dependent mechanism leading to a rise in intracellular calcium levels and ultimately causing contraction).
Revised:  Angiotensin II increases blood pressure by stimulating the Gq URL in vascular smooth muscle cells (which in turn activates an IP3-dependent mechanism leading to a rise in intracellular calcium levels and ultimately causing contraction).
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Original:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big anaesthetic machine, as it only is designed to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is relieved for the sensibility to feel pain -but remain fully consious
Revised:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big Anaesthetic machine, as it only is designed to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is relieved for the sensibility to feel pain -but remain fully consious
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Original:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big anaesthetic machine, as it only is designed to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is relieved for the sensibility to feel pain -but remain fully consious
Revised:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big anaesthetic machine, as it only is designed to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is relieved for the sensibility to feel pain -but remain fully conscious
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Original:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big Anaesthetic machine, as it doesnt feature the additional Medical ventilator and Anaesthetic vaporiser (which are only needed for administration of the more powerful general anesthetics).
Revised:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big Anaesthetic machine, as it doesn't feature the additional Medical ventilator and Anaesthetic vaporiser (which are only needed for administration of the more powerful general anesthetics).
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Original:  Instead the Relative analgesia machine has been specificly designed, just to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is relieved for the sensibility to feel pain -but remain fully conscious
Revised:  Instead the Relative analgesia machine has been specifically designed, just to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is relieved for the sensibility to feel pain -but remain fully conscious
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Original: A Relative analgesia machine is used by a dentist to impose inhalation sedation upon his patient .
Revised: A Relative analgesia machine is used by dentists to impose inhalation sedation upon his patient .
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Original: A Relative analgesia machine is used by a dentist to impose inhalation sedation upon his patient .
Revised: A Relative analgesia machine is used by a dentist to impose inhalation sedation upon their patients .
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Original:  Instead the Relative analgesia machine has been specifically designed , just to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is relieved for the sensibility to feel pain -but remain fully conscious
Revised:  Instead the Relative analgesia machine has been specifically designed to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is relieved for the sensibility to feel pain -but remain fully conscious
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Original:  Instead the Relative analgesia machine has been specifically designed , just to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is relieved for the sensibility to feel pain -but remain fully conscious
Revised:  Instead the Relative analgesia machine has been specifically designed , just to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is less sensitive to pain but remains fully conscious
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Original: A relative analgesia machine is used by dentists to impose inhalation sedation upon their patients.
Revised: A relative analgesia machine is used by dentists to induce inhalation sedation in their patients.
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Original:  In more exact terms, the machine deliver a mix of nitrous oxide and oxygen, also known as "laughing gas".
Revised:  It delivers a mixture of nitrous oxide and oxygen, also known as "laughing gas".
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Original:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big anaesthetic machine, as it doesn't feature the additional medical ventilator and anaesthetic vaporiser ( which are only needed for administration of the more powerful general anesthetics) .
Revised:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big anaesthetic machine, as it does not feature the additional medical ventilator and anaesthetic vaporiser ( which are only needed for administration of the more powerful general anesthetics) .
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Original:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big anaesthetic machine, as it doesn't feature the additional medical ventilator and anaesthetic vaporiser ( which are only needed for administration of the more powerful general anesthetics) .
Revised:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big anaesthetic machine, as it doesn't feature the additional medical ventilator and anaesthetic vaporiser , which are only needed for administration of the more powerful general anesthetics) .
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Original:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big anaesthetic machine, as it doesn't feature the additional medical ventilator and anaesthetic vaporiser ( which are only needed for administration of the more powerful general anesthetics) .
Revised:  The machine is less advanced compared to a big anaesthetic machine, as it doesn't feature the additional medical ventilator and anaesthetic vaporiser ( which are only needed for administration of general anesthetics .
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Original:  Instead the relative analgesia machine has been specifically designed to perform the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is less sensitive to pain but remains fully conscious.
Revised:  Instead the relative analgesia machine is designed for the light form of anaesthesia with nitrous oxide, where the patient is less sensitive to pain but remains fully conscious.
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Original:  See also Anaesthetic machine Nitrous oxide Sedation References Category:Dentistry Category:Anesthesia Category:Anesthetic equipment Category:Drug delivery devices Category:Dosage for
Revised:  Anaesthetic machine Nitrous oxide Sedation References Category:Dentistry Category:Anesthesia Category:Anesthetic equipment Category:Drug delivery devices Category:Dosage for
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Original:  See also Anaesthetic machine Nitrous oxide Sedation References Category:Dentistry Category:Anesthesia Category:Anesthetic equipment Category:Drug delivery devices Category:Dosage for
Revised:  See also References Category:Dentistry Category:Anesthesia Category:Anesthetic equipment Category:Drug delivery devices Category:Dosage for
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Original:  See also Anaesthetic machine Nitrous oxide Sedation References Category:Dentistry Category:Anesthesia Category:Anesthetic equipment Category:Drug delivery devices Category:Dosage for
Revised:  See also Anaesthetic machine Nitrous oxide Sedation References Category:Dentistry Category:Anesthetic equipment Category:Drug delivery devices Category:Dosage for
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Original:  Another source of the term Zemblanity could be the expedition by Willem Barendsz (ca. 1550 - June 20, 1597) and crew to find a northeast passage from Europe to Asia via strait Bering.
Revised:  Another source of the term Zemblanity could be the expedition by Willem Barendsz (ca. 1550 - June 20, 1597) and crew to find a northeast passage from Europe to Asia via Strait Bering.
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Original:  Willem Baredsz died on the way back, on the sea that since bears his name (Russian: Barentsevo More). See URL
Revised:  Willem Barendsz died on the way back, on the sea that since bears his name (Russian: Barentsevo More). See URL
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Original:   Serendipity is an unplanned fortunate discovery.
Revised: short description|Unplanned, fortunate discovery Serendipity is an unplanned fortunate discovery.
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Original:   Serendipity is an unplanned fortunate discovery.
Revised:  o... Serendipity is an unplanned fortunate discovery.
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Original: {{short description|Unplanned, fortunate discovery} o...
Revised: {{short description|Unplanned, fortunate discovery} 
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Original: Serendipity is an unplanned fortunate discovery.
Revised: Serendipity is an unplanned horny discovery.
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Original:  At its camps for training cadres in Mozambique and Zambia, all new ZANLA cadres were publicly beaten by their officers until they lose control of their bowels to determine if they were "sell-outs" to the revolution and huge pit structures called chikaribotso were dug for holding prisoners as many of the cadres did not pass the test for to see if they were loyal to the revolution.
Revised:  At its camps for training cadres in Mozambique and Zambia, all new ZANLA cadres were publicly beaten by their officers until they lose control of their bowels to determine if they were "sell-outs" to the revolution and huge pit structures called chikaribotso were dug for holding prisoners as many of the cadres did not pass the test to see if they were loyal to the revolution.
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Original:  Many of the idealistic Shona young men and women who joined the ZANLA to fight against the minority government of Rhodesia were greatly disillusioned once they reach the training camps in Mozambique and Zambia, discovering that the ZANLA were far from being the romantic freedom-fighters that they had imagined.
Revised:  Many of the idealistic Shona young men and women who joined the ZANLA to fight against the minority government of Rhodesia were greatly disillusioned once they reached the training camps in Mozambique and Zambia, discovering that the ZANLA were far from being the romantic freedom-fighters that they had imagined.
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Original:  With the war drawing to a close, command fell to Robert Mugabe, previously ZANU's number two leader after Tongogara and head of the movement's political wing.
Revised:  With the war drawing to a close, commands fell to Robert Mugabe, previously ZANU's number two leader after Tongogara and head of the movement's political wing.
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Original:  As Mugabe had described himself in an interview as a "Marxist– Leninist of Maoist Thought"  , which enraged the Kremlin, Soviet support went exclusively to the rival Zimbabwe People's Revolutionary Army (ZIPRA).
Revised:  As Mugabe had described himself in an interview as a "Marxist– Leninist of Maoist Thought" supporter , which enraged the Kremlin, Soviet support went exclusively to the rival Zimbabwe People's Revolutionary Army (ZIPRA).
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Original: The action of March 1677 in the West Indies, often called the Battle of Tobago, took place on 3 March 1677 between a Dutch fleet under  Jacob Binckes and a French force attempting to recapture the island of Tobago  .
Revised: The action of March 1677 , also known as the Battle of Tobago, took place on 3 March 1677 between a Dutch fleet under Jacob Binckes and a French force attempting to recapture the island of Tobago .
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Original: The action of March 1677 in the West Indies, often called the Battle of Tobago, took place on 3 March 1677 between a Dutch fleet under  Jacob Binckes and a French force attempting to recapture the island of Tobago  .
Revised: The action of March 1677 in the West Indies, often called the Battle of Tobago, took place on 3 March 1677 between a Dutch fleet under the command of Jacob Binckes and a French force attempting to recapture the island of Tobago .
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Original: The action of March 1677 in the West Indies, often called the Battle of Tobago, took place on 3 March 1677 between a Dutch fleet under  Jacob Binckes and a French force attempting to recapture the island of Tobago  .
Revised: The action of March 1677 in the West Indies, often called the Battle of Tobago, took place on 3 March 1677 between a Dutch fleet under Jacob Binckes and a French force attempting to recapture the island of Tobago in the West Indies .
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Original:  the fire then quickly spread in the narrow bay causing several ships , among them the French flagship Glorieux, to catch fire and explode in turn which resulted in great loss of life.
Revised:  the fire then quickly spread in the narrow bay causing several warships , among them the French flagship Glorieux, to catch fire and explode in turn which resulted in great loss of life.
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Original:  The French under Vice-Admiral Comte d'Estrées retreated but would make a second attempt  at the end of the year with a much stronger fleet.
Revised:  The French fleet retreated but would make a second attempt at the end of the year with a much stronger fleet.
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Original:  60 people dead Intrépide (56 guns) -
Revised:  60 killed L' Intrépide (56 guns) -
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Original:  (Louis  Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged  Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen  - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
Revised:  (Louis de Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
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Original:  (Louis  Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged  Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen  - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
Revised:  (Louis Gabaret) Captured Le Precieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
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Original:  (Louis  Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged  Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen  - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
Revised:  (Louis Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Captured Le Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
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Original:  (Louis  Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged  Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen  - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
Revised:  (Louis Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Dutch Republic Beschermer (flagship, 54 guns ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
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Original:  (Louis  Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged  Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen  - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
Revised:  (Louis Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 killed Huis te Kruiningen - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
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Original:  (Louis  Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged  Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen  - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured , blown up by its own crew ;
Revised:  (Louis Gabaret) Captured and burnt Précieux (54 guns) - Aground and captured Marquis (46 guns) - Blew up Galant (46 guns) - Damaged Fendant (54 guns) - (Charles de Courbon de Blénac) Damaged Jeux (40 guns) Emérillon (36 guns) Soleil d'Afrique (30 guns) Laurier (28 guns) - (Charles-François de Machault de Belmont) plus some smaller vessels Netherlands Beschermer (flag ) - (Jacob Binckes) 50 people dead Huis te Kruiningen - (Roemer Vlacq) Captured ;
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Original: Syed Shaukat Hussain Rizvi ( ;
Revised: Syed Shaukat Hussain Rizvi ( 
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Original:  1914 – 1999) was a Pakistani actor, film producer and film director.
Revised:  1914 – 1999) was a Pakistani actor, film producer and director.
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Original:  Death Anniversary of Shaukat Hussain Rizvi observed in 2016, Radio Pakistan website, Published 19 August 2016, Retrieved 3 September 2017
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Original:  He is also the great-uncle of OFWGKTA leader Tyler, the Creator.
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Original:  On the other hand, there is a heavier focus on the social determinism as seen in human behavior  instead.
Revised:  <ref> instead.
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Original:  It has been observed that the terms "nature" and "culture" that can not necessarily be translated into non-western languages,Strathern 1980 for example, the Native American  John Mohawk describing "nature" as "anything that supports life".
Revised:  It has been observed that the terms "nature" and "culture" that can not necessarily be translated into non-western languages,Strathern 1980 for example, the Native American scholar John Mohawk describing "nature" as "anything that supports life".
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Original: The nature       –culture divide is deeply intertwined with the social versus biological debate, since it both are implications of each other.
Revised: The nature History Within European culture, land was an inherited right for each family’s firstborn and every other child would need to find another way to claim land. European expansion would be motivated by this desire to claim land, but other factors were for religion (eg. Crusades) and discovery (eg. voyages). In addition to the desire for expansion, Europeans also had the resources for external growth. They had ships, maps, and knowledge--a complex of politics, economy, and military tactics that they believed were superior for ruling. These helped to possess and rule the people and lands they came in contact with. One large element of this was their strong belief in private property. –culture divide is deeply intertwined with the social versus biological debate, since it both are implications of each other.
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