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Original: Philip Crowley, a spokesperson for the US State Department , announced early Thursday morning that the US embassy would be closed to the public due to its location near the violence.
Revised: Philip Crowley, a spokesperson for the US State Department , announced early Thursday morning that the would be closed to the public due to its location near the violence.
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Original:  The leader of the protests was fugitive Major-General Khattiya Sawasdipol , the radical leader of the militant Red Shirt movement.
Revised:  The leader of the protests was fugitive Major-General , the radical leader of the militant Red Shirt movement.
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Original:  The leader of the protests was fugitive Major-General Khattiya Sawasdipol , the radical leader of the militant Red Shirt movement.
Revised:  The leader of the protests was fugitive Major-General Khattiya Sawasdipol , the radical leader of the militant movement.
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Original:  While giving interviews with foreign journalists, Sawasdipol appeared to have been shot in the head by a sniper .
Revised:  While giving interviews with foreign journalists, Sawasdipol appeared to have been shot in the head by a .
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Original:  The violence is a result of the belief of the protesters that Thai Prime Minister Abhisit Vejjajiva took power through illegitimate means with the support of the Thai military
Revised:  The violence is a result of the belief of the protesters that Abhisit Vejjajiva took power through illegitimate means with the support of the Thai military
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Original: The Russian president urged Hamas to work on a reconciliation deal with its rival Fatah, and insisted that "no one" should be excluded from the Middle East peace process, according to his spokeswoman.
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Original:  He also rquested that an Israeli soldier captured by Hamas in 2006, Gilad Shalit, be released, although this was refused by Hamas, who says that Shalit wouldn't be released unless there was an "honourable" prisoner exchange with Israel  .
Revised:  He also requested that an Israeli soldier captured by Hamas in 2006, Gilad Shalit, be released, although this was refused by Hamas, who says that Shalit wouldn't be released unless there was an "honourable" prisoner exchange with Israel .
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Original:  the European Union and the United States regard it as a terrorist organisation Russia is one of a handful of European countries to maintain ties with the group.
Revised:  the European Union and the United States regard it as Russia is one of a handful of European countries to maintain ties with the group.
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Original:  Ha'aretz, an Israeli newspaper, described the meeting as being "a surprise" for the country .
Revised:  Ha'aretz, an Israeli newspaper, described the meeting as being "a surprise" for the country 
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Original: The incident has been seen as embarrassing for both the Russian and American governments, as the two countries are  trying to repair their previously troubled relationship.
Revised: The incident has been seen as embarrassing for both the Russian and American governments, as the two countries are currently trying to repair their previously troubled relationship.
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Original: The incident has been seen as embarrassing for both the Russian and American governments, as the two countries are  trying to repair their previously troubled relationship.
Revised: The incident has been seen as embarrassing for both the Russian and American governments, as the two countries are trying to repair their previously rocky relationship.
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Original: Newly-elected UK Prime Minister David Cameron today travelled north to Scotland to meet with Scottish First MinsterAlex Salmond for the first time since last week's election.
Revised: Newly-elected UK Prime Minister David Cameron today travelled north to Scotland to meet with the country's First Minster, Alex Salmond, for the first time since last week's election.
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Original: Newly-elected UK Prime Minister David Cameron today travelled north to Scotland to meet with Scottish First MinsterAlex Salmond for the first time since last week's election.
Revised: Newly-elected UK Prime Minister David Cameron today travelled north to Scotland to meet with Scottish First MinsterAlex Salmond for the first time since the general election.
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Original:  According to The Scotsman, around 200  protesters greeted the new PM with a noisy protest forcing security staff to take him into the  parliament via a back door.
Revised:  According to The Scotsman, around 200 noisy protesters greeted the new PM with a noisy protest forcing security staff to take him into the parliament via a back door.
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Original:  According to The Scotsman, around 200  protesters greeted the new PM with a noisy protest forcing security staff to take him into the  parliament via a back door.
Revised:  According to The Scotsman, around 200 protesters greeted the new PM , forcing security staff to take him into the parliament via a back door.
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Original:  However, both Cameron and Salmond anticipating that cuts may need to be made in subsequent years.
Revised:  However, both Cameron and Salmond anticipate that cuts may need to be made in subsequent years.
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Original: Newly-appointed UK Prime Minister David Cameron today travelled north to Scotland to meet with the country's First Minister , Alex Salmond, for the first time since the general election.
Revised: Newly-appointed UK David Cameron today travelled north to Scotland to meet with the country's First Minister , Alex Salmond, for the first time since the general election.
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Original: Newly-appointed UK Prime Minister David Cameron today travelled north to Scotland to meet with the country's First Minister , Alex Salmond, for the first time since the general election.
Revised: Newly-appointed UK Prime Minister David Cameron today travelled north to Scotland to meet with the country's , Alex Salmond, for the first time since the general election.
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Original:  At the same conference, Cameron told reporters "I believe, and Danny [Alexander] believes, that we should be pursuing the Calman agenda , and that that is a much greater degree of fiscal autonomy for Scotland.
Revised:  At the same conference, Cameron told reporters "I believe, and Danny [Alexander] believes, that we should be pursuing the , and that that is a much greater degree of fiscal autonomy for Scotland.
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Original:  The provisional government, led by Roza Otunbayeva, said that it had managed to retake the offices in Batken after the demonstrators left the buildings there  
Revised:  The provisional government, led by Roza Otunbayeva, said that it had managed to retake the offices in Batken after the demonstrators left the buildings there . 
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Original: Backers of the ousted president took over regional government offices in Osh, Jalalabad and Batken, in the southern part of the country yesterday.
Revised: Backers of the ousted president took over regional government offices in Osh, Jalal-Abad and Batken, in the southern part of the country yesterday.
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Original:  Up to 200 other Bakiyev supporters, most of whom were women, managed to seize administration buildings in Jalalabad , also untouched by police.
Revised:  Up to 200 other Bakiyev supporters, most of whom were women, managed to seize administration buildings in Jalal-Abad , also untouched by police.
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Original: Backers of the ousted president took over regional government offices in Osh, Jalal-Abad and Batken, in the southern part of the country yesterday.
Revised: Backers of the ousted president took over regional government offices in Osh, Jalal-Abad , and Batken in the southern part of the country yesterday.
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Original: However, events turned deadly when a group of 4,000 pro-government citizens approached the occupied buildings . Jalal-Abad hospitals reported receiving 37 people wounded in the incident, and at least one person has died.
Revised: A group of 4,000 pro-government citizens approached the occupied buildings . Jalal-Abad hospitals reported receiving 37 people wounded in the incident, and at least one person has died.
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Original: However, events turned deadly when a group of 4,000 pro-government citizens approached the occupied buildings . Jalal-Abad hospitals reported receiving 37 people wounded in the incident, and at least one person has died.
Revised: However, events turned deadly when a group of 4,000 pro-government citizens approached the occupied buildings in Jalal-Abad hospitals reported receiving 37 people wounded in the incident, and at least one person has died.
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Original:  The interim government of Kyrgyzstan has regained control of several government offices after a long day of violent clashes with supporters of former Kyrgyzstan President Kurmanbek Bakiyev. Backers of the ousted president took over regional government offices in Osh, Jalal-Abad, and Batken in the southern part of the country yesterday.
Revised:  The interim government of Kyrgyzstan has regained control of several government offices after a day of violent clashes with supporters of former Kyrgyzstan President Kurmanbek Bakiyev. Backers of the ousted president took over regional government offices in Osh, Jalal-Abad, and Batken in the southern part of the country yesterday.
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Original:  After taking control , they released a statement calling for the reinstatement of Bakiyev's administration.
Revised:  Afterward , they released a statement calling for the reinstatement of Bakiyev's administration.
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Original:  The Kyrgyz government said that they would use counter-protests  rather than police forces, to combat the demonstrators
Revised:  The Kyrgyz government said that they would use counter-protests , rather than police forces, to combat the demonstrators
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Original:  "We arrived at the mine to carry out the rescue at midnight, and helped bring three of the survivors out of the shaft," he told Xinhua  
Revised:  "We arrived at the mine to carry out the rescue at midnight, and helped bring three of the survivors out of the shaft," he told Xinhua . 
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Original:  It wasn't immediately clear what caused the explosion, although it is being investigated, Xinhua reports  .
Revised:  It was not immediately clear what caused the explosion, although it is being investigated, Xinhua reports .
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Original:  Killing all the state officials would have accelerated the transition from a democracy to a state controlled by Islamic Shariah law," he said    
Revised:  Killing all the state officials would have accelerated the transition from a democracy to a state controlled by Islamic Shariah law," he said . 
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Original:   The plot was revealed in part due to several anti-terror raids near the capital, which saw twenty people arrested.
Revised:  "If we had not detected them and their military training had been successful, then they would have assassinated foreigners." The plot was revealed in part due to several anti-terror raids near the capital, which saw twenty people arrested.
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Original:  Many of those now in custody were reportedly trained at a camp in Aceh, and operated by a branch of the Jemaah Islamiyah group called al-Qaeda in Aceh  
Revised:  Many of those now in custody were reportedly trained at a camp in Aceh, and operated by a branch of the Jemaah Islamiyah group called al-Qaeda in Aceh . 
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Original:  The same day, the Supreme Decree N° 524 was validated, whereby it is also authorized the functioning of Student's Centres in the High Education schools.
Revised:  The same day, the Supreme Decree N° 524 was validated, whereby also authorized the functioning of Student's Centres in the High Education schools.
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Original:  Competitions and games were originally planned to take place in the school's yard, but due to adverse weather, it was moved to an old, large room.
Revised:  Competitions and games were originally planned to take place in the school's yard, but due to adverse weather, these were moved to an old, large room.
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Original:  The Verde alliance performed an sketch with Right Said Fred's I'm Too Sexy.
Revised:  The Verde alliance performed a sketch with Right Said Fred's I'm Too Sexy.
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Original:  The next activity in the morning was gymkhana, that consisted in three steps for students from first to eight grades of Basic Education: Put a thread through a needle.
Revised:  The next activity in the morning was gymkhana, that consisted if three steps for students from first to eight grades of Basic Education: Put a thread through a needle.
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Original:  Eat a sandwich with hot chilli, and to take a glass of Coke.
Revised:  Eat a sandwich with hot chilli, and drink a glass of Coke.
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Original:  Pump up and burst two globe .
Revised:  Pump up and burst two globes .
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Original:  The last game was tugar tugar, that consisted in dancing known songs, including The Rickrollerz's Never Gonna Give You Up, Cosculluela's Prrum, Michael Jackson's Billie Jean, Américo's Te Vas and Chilean cuecas.
Revised:  The last game was tugar tugar, which consisted of dancing known songs, including The Rickrollerz's Never Gonna Give You Up, Cosculluela's Prrum, Michael Jackson's Billie Jean, Américo's Te Vas and Chilean cuecas.
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Original:  Angélica Miranda and Mother Loreto Fuentes, both juries , congratulated both teams and gave the total results: Student's Day in other parts of Chile Los Ángeles [[File:Calle central de los angeles.jpg|Main street of Los Ángeles.
Revised:  Angélica Miranda and Mother Loreto Fuentes, both judges , congratulated both teams and gave the total results: Student's Day in other parts of Chile Los Ángeles [[File:Calle central de los angeles.jpg|Main street of Los Ángeles.
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Original: ]] The Student's Day was celebrated on Wednesday, the 12 in Los Ángeles.
Revised: ]] The Student's Day was celebrated on Wednesday, the 12th in Los Ángeles.
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Original:  The event took place in a room of the stablishment . Crot was the Principal of the Institute until just some weeks ago, charge he had to leave to become Seremi.
Revised:  The event took place in a room of the establishment . Crot was the Principal of the Institute until just some weeks ago, charge he had to leave to become Seremi.
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Original:  The event took place in a room of the stablishment . Crot was the Principal of the Institute until just some weeks ago, charge he had to leave to become Seremi.
Revised:  The event took place in a room of the stablishment . Crot was the Principal of the Institute until just some weeks ago, when he had to leave to become Seremi.
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Original:  Punta Arenas The Student's Day was celebrated in Thursday 13  too.
Revised:  Punta Arenas The Student's Day was celebrated on Thursday 13 too.
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Original:  Punta Arenas The Student's Day was celebrated in Thursday 13  too.
Revised:  Punta Arenas The Student's Day was celebrated in Thursday 13 here, too.
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Original: On Friday morning, Students' Day was celebrated in the most schools across Chile.
Revised: On Friday morning, Student's Day was celebrated in the most schools across Chile.
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Original:  The event was organized by Nicole Grez, Carol Piña  and Paola Sepúlveda, amidst others, and the judges included Angélica Miranda and Mother Loreto Fuentes.
Revised:  The event was organized by Nicole Grez, Carol Piña , and Paola Sepúlveda, amidst others, and the judges included Angélica Miranda and Mother Loreto Fuentes.
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Original:  The first of the activities was the performance of a Pichileminian metal band, that covered Metallica 's songs.
Revised:  The first of the activities was the performance of a Pichileminian metal band, that covered 's songs.
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Original:  The Roja alliance prepared the imitation of Ráfaga 's Luna Luna.
Revised:  The Roja alliance prepared the imitation of 's Luna Luna.
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Original:  The Verde alliance performed a sketch with Right Said Fred's I'm Too Sexy .
Revised:  The Verde alliance performed a sketch with 's .
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Original:  The next activity in the morning was gymkhana , that consisted if three steps for students from first to eight grades of Basic Education: Put a thread through a needle.
Revised:  The next activity in the morning was , that consisted if three steps for students from first to eight grades of Basic Education: Put a thread through a needle.
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Original:  Subsequently, some girls from the Cheer-leading team performed a dance with some teachers from the school.
Revised:  Subsequently, some girls from the team performed a dance with some teachers from the school.
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Original:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
Revised:  in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
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Original:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
Revised:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
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Original:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
Revised:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
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Original:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
Revised:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
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Original:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
Revised:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
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Original:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
Revised:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
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Original:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - Suelta Mi Mano : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
Revised:  File:Americo en vivo 2.jpg|Américo in October 2009 Results 1st to 4th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Una Cuncuna Amarilla : Draw Américo - Que Levante La Mano : Verde team won Shakira - Loba : Verde team won 5th to 8th Grade (Basic) Mazapán - Caballito Blanco : Rojo team won Sin Bandera - : Rojo team won DJ Méndez feat.
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Original:  Student's Day in other parts of Chile Los Ángeles %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Calle central de los angeles.jpg| Main street of Los Ángeles.
Revised:  Student's Day in other parts of Chile Los Ángeles %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Main street of Los Ángeles.
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Original:  Student's Day in other parts of Chile Los Ángeles %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Calle central de los angeles.jpg| Main street of Los Ángeles.
Revised:  Student's Day in other parts of Chile Los Ángeles %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Calle central de los angeles.jpg| Main street of .
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Original:  The Student's Day was celebrated on Wednesday, the 12th in Los Ángeles .
Revised:  The Student's Day was celebrated on Wednesday, the 12th in .
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Original:  In the José Manso de Velasco School, one of the teachers disguised as Américo , and revolutionized the students.
Revised:  In the José Manso de Velasco School, one of the teachers disguised as , and revolutionized the students.
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Original:  Parral %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Comuna Parral.png|Location of Parral in the Maule Region.
Revised:  Parral %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Location of in the .
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Original:  The Student's Day was celebrated on Thursday 13, in Parral .
Revised:  The Student's Day was celebrated on Thursday 13, in .
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Original:  The Mayor of the city, Israel Urrutia Escobar, managed to take a Savory and Chocapic (both part of Nestle ) tent to Parral.
Revised:  The Mayor of the city, Israel Urrutia Escobar, managed to take a Savory and Chocapic (both part of ) tent to Parral.
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Original:  Some of them are: Talcahuano, Coronel, Chillán, Talca, Constitución ,  and some other minor towns.
Revised:  Some of them are: , and some other minor towns.
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Original:  Some of them are: Talcahuano, Coronel, Chillán, Talca, Constitución ,  and some other minor towns.
Revised:  Some of them are: Talcahuano, Coronel, Chillán, Talca, Constitución , , , , , and some other minor towns.
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