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Original:  She was 76-years-old .
Revised:  She was 76 years old .
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Original: 170px|Location of Antrim within Northern IrelandTwo military personnel were killed during a gun attack outside an army base in Antrim County , Northern Ireland, According to police, two other military personnel, as well as two civilians, were also reported to have been hurt.
Revised: 170px|Location of Antrim within Northern IrelandTwo military personnel were killed during a gun attack outside an army base in County Antrim , Northern Ireland, According to police, two other military personnel, as well as two civilians, were also reported to have been hurt.
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Original: 170px|Location of Antrim within Northern IrelandTwo military personnel were killed during a gun attack outside an army base in Antrim County , Northern Ireland, According to police, two other military personnel, as well as two civilians, were also reported to have been hurt.
Revised: 170px|Location of Antrim within Northern IrelandTwo military personnel were killed during a gun attack outside an army base in Antrim County , Northern Ireland, 
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Original:  The attack occurred at 21:40 GMT outside the Massereene Army base, home to 38 Engineering Regiment, in Antrim, 16 miles north of Belfast.
Revised:  The attack occurred at 21:40 GMT outside the Massereene Army base, home to 38 Engineering Regiment, 16 miles north of Belfast.
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Original:  It is estimated that about thirty or forty gunshots were fired in two bursts of automatic weapon fire.
Revised:  It is estimated that 
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Original:  Then all you heard was the police sirens and ambulances and there was at least six ambulances.  
Revised:  Then all you heard was the police sirens and ambulances and there was at least six ambulances. " 
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Original: The attack occurred at 21:40 GMT outside the Massereene Army base, home to 38 Engineering Regiment, 16 miles north west of Belfast.
Revised: The attack occurred at 21:40 GMT outside the Massereene army base, home to 38 Engineering Regiment, 16 miles north west of Belfast.
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Original: 170px|Location of Antrim within Northern IrelandTwo British Army soldiers were killed in a gun attack outside an army base in County Antrim, Northern Ireland, The attack occurred at 21:40 GMT outside the Massereene army base, home to 38 Engineering Regiment, 16 miles north west of Belfast.
Revised: 170px|Location of Antrim within Northern IrelandTwo British Army soldiers have been killed in a gun attack outside an army base in County Antrim, Northern Ireland, The attack occurred at 21:40 GMT outside the Massereene army base, home to 38 Engineering Regiment, 16 miles north west of Belfast.
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Original:  According to  police, two other soldiers, as well as two civilian security guards, were also reported to have been hurt, one critically.
Revised:  According to the police, two other soldiers, as well as two civilian security guards, were also reported to have been hurt, one critically.
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Original:  According to  police, two other soldiers, as well as two civilian security guards, were also reported to have been hurt, one critically.
Revised:  According to police, two other soldiers, as well as two civilian security guards, have been hurt, one critically.
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Original:  The incidentwas described as a drive-by shooting by a Ministry of Defence spokesperson .
Revised:  In the incident, described as a drive-by shooting by a Ministry of Defence spokesperson .
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Original:  It is estimated that thirty to forty rounds were fired at the personnel who were possibly taking a pizza delivery.
Revised:  It is estimated that thirty to forty rounds were fired at the soldiers, who were possibly taking a pizza delivery.
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Original:  Although no party has  claimed responsibilty, the attack bears the hallmarks of dissident Republicans.
Revised:  Although no party has yet claimed responsibilty, the attack bears the hallmarks of dissident Republicans.
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Original:  According to the police  , two other soldiers , as well as two civilian security guards , have been hurt, one critically.
Revised:  According to the police , two other soldiers and two civilians , have been hurt, one critically.
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Original:  In the incident, described as a drive-by shooting by a Ministry of Defence spokesperson, an estimated thirty to forty rounds were fired at the soldiers, who were possibly taking a pizza delivery  .
Revised:  In the incident, described as a drive-by shooting by a Ministry of Defence spokesperson, an estimated thirty to forty rounds were fired at the soldiers, who were taking a pizza delivery .
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Original: Paul Creamer takes sizes up the green during the HSBC Womens Championship.
Revised: Paula Creamer takes sizes up the green during the HSBC Womens Championship.
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Original: Paula Creamer takes sizes up the green during the HSBC Womens Championship.
Revised: Paula Creamer tees of during the HSBC Womens Championship.
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Original: Looking nervous and beaten Hull managed a birdie on the 17th and still in contention to force a play-off should Shin falter.
Revised:  Hull managed a birdie on the 17th and still in contention to force a play-off should Shin falter.
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Original: Two Bosnian soldiers hunting for Serbian sniper in Sarajevo, 1990s Commemoration of the Srebrenica massacre was held on July 11, when newly identified bodies will be buried.
Revised: Two Bosnian soldiers hunting for Serbian sniper in Sarajevo, 1990s Commemoration of the Srebrenica massacre will be held on July 11, when newly identified bodies will be buried.
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Original:  In 1995, Serbian forces have , according to International Criminal Tribunal for the Former Yugoslavia (ICTY), massacred around 7500 Bosnian Muslims.
Revised:  In 1995, Serbian forces , according to International Criminal Tribunal for the Former Yugoslavia (ICTY), massacred around 7500 Bosnian Muslims.
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Original:  Abdurahman Malkić, the president of  Srebrenica municipality, guaranteed safety to Tadić and all other officials.
Revised:  Abdurahman Malkić, the president of the Srebrenica municipality, guaranteed safety to Tadić and all other officials.
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Original:  Bojan Pajtić, the president of the executive board of the northern Serbian province, Vojvodina, agreed to officially support  initiative of the Independent Journalists' Association of Vojvodina to declare July 11 a Memorial Day in Serbia and Montenegro.
Revised:  Bojan Pajtić, the president of the executive board of the northern Serbian province, Vojvodina, agreed to officially support an initiative of the Independent Journalists' Association of Vojvodina to declare July 11 a Memorial Day in Serbia and Montenegro.
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Original:  Bojan Pajtić, the president of the executive board of the northern Serbian province, Vojvodina, agreed to officially support  initiative of the Independent Journalists' Association of Vojvodina to declare July 11 a Memorial Day in Serbia and Montenegro.
Revised:  Bojan Pajtić, the president of the executive board of the northern Serbian province, Vojvodina, agreed to officially support initiative of the Independent Journalists' Association of Vojvodina to declare July 11th a Memorial Day in Serbia and Montenegro.
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Original:  Agency for marketing research, Faktor Plus, published a study on Serbian citizens' reaction on the video.
Revised:  An agency for marketing research, Faktor Plus, published a study on Serbian citizens' reaction on the video.
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Original: Two Bosnian soldiers hunting for Serbian sniper in Sarajevo, 1990s Commemoration of the Srebrenica massacre will be held on July 11, when newly identified bodies will be buried.
Revised: Two Bosnian soldiers hunting for aSerbian sniper in Sarajevo, 1990s Commemoration of the Srebrenica massacre will be held on July 11, when newly identified bodies will be buried.
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Original: A contraversy arose after mothers of murdered Muslims in Srebrenica made a statement saying that the Serbian President, Boris Tadić, is not welcome in Srebrenica: "Tadić coming to Srebrenica is a planned provocation of the ones who will bury their families on July 11."
Revised: A controversy arose after mothers of murdered Muslims in Srebrenica made a statement saying that the Serbian President, Boris Tadić, is not welcome in Srebrenica: "Tadić coming to Srebrenica is a planned provocation of the ones who will bury their families on July 11."
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Original: Two Bosnian soldiers hunting for aSerbian sniper in Sarajevo, 1990s Commemoration of the Srebrenica massacre will be held on July 11, when newly identified bodies will be buried.
Revised: Two Bosnian soldiers hunting for a Serbian sniper in Sarajevo, 1990s Commemoration of the Srebrenica massacre will be held on July 11, when newly identified bodies will be buried.
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Original: Recent showing of a video which depicts six Bosnian Muslims from Srebrenica being killed by Serbian forces has steered a lot of contraversy in Serbia.
Revised: Recent showing of a video which depicts six Bosnian Muslims from Srebrenica being killed by Serbian forces has steered a lot of controversy in Serbia.
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Original: Two Bosnian soldiers hunting for a Serbian sniper in Sarajevo, 1990s Commemoration of the Srebrenica massacre will be held on July 11, when newly identified bodies will be buried.
Revised:  Commemoration of the Srebrenica massacre will be held on July 11, when newly identified bodies will be buried.
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Original:  As four soldiers collected their pizzas at the main gate they, and the delivery drivers, were attacked by semi-automatic small arms fire from a parked vehicle nearby.
Revised:  As four soldiers collected their pizzas at the main gate they, and the delivery drivers, were attacked from a parked vehicle nearby.
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Original:  As the six lay on the ground the gunmen approached on foot and again shot the injured men  in what has been described as an "execution  " at short range.
Revised:  As the six lay on the ground the gunmen approached on foot and again shot the injured men , in what has been described as an "execution " at short range.
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Original:  As the six lay on the ground the gunmen approached on foot and again shot the injured men  in what has been described as an "execution  " at short range.
Revised:  As the six lay on the ground the gunmen approached on foot and again shot the injured men in what has been described as an "execution , " at short range.
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Original: The attack is the first successful terrorist attack against security forces in tweleve years, with an attempted car bombing and the shooting of police officers having been previously thwarted.
Revised: The attack is the first successful terrorist attack against security forces in twelve years, with an attempted car bombing and the shooting of police officers having been previously thwarted.
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Original:  The attack soldiers were due to deploy to Afghanistan this morning.
Revised:  The attacked soldiers were due to deploy to Afghanistan this morning.
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Original:  This was followed by a tenth-place finish in the Bundesliga via an embarrassing 5-1 defeat by champions VfL Wolfsburg.
Revised:  This was followed by a tenth-place finish in the Bundesliga via an "embarrassing" 5-1 defeat by champions VfL Wolfsburg.
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Original:   René Adler had to push a header from Naldo just over the bar in injury time.
Revised:  Bremen keeper René Adler had to push a header from Naldo just over the bar in injury time.
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Original:  Stefan Kießling seemed to have a chance on 79 minutes, but it was despatched by Sebastian Prödl.
Revised:  Stefan Kießling seemed to have a legitimate chance after 79 minutes, but it was despatched by Sebastian Prödl.
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Original:  Referee Dr Helmut Fleischer booked Hugo Almeida and Wiese for time-wasting.
Revised:  They were helped when referee Dr Helmut Fleischer booked Hugo Almeida and Wiese for time-wasting.
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Original: German side Werder Bremen won the DFB-Pokal (Germany's equivalent of the FA Cup) on Saturday night by beating Bayer Leverkusen 1-0.
Revised: German team Werder Bremen won the DFB-Pokal (Germany's equivalent of the FA Cup) on Saturday night by beating Bayer Leverkusen 1-0.
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Original: Wolfram Research Inc., makers of Mathematica and  New Kind of Science, have released a limited alpha of their new web service Wolfram Alpha.
Revised: Wolfram Research Inc., makers of Mathematica and A New Kind of Science, have released a limited alpha of their new web service Wolfram Alpha.
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Original:  In theory, any question with a factual answer can be answered by Wolfram Alpha .
Revised:  In theory, any question with a factual answer can be answered by Wolfram Alpha 
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Original:  In theory, any question with a factual answer can be answered by Wolfram Alpha.
Revised:  In theory, any question with a factual answer could be answered by Wolfram Alpha.
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Original: Unlike traditional search engines Wolfram Alpha does not search online documents, and thus does not return answers to “fuzzy” questions, such as opinion or advice.
Revised: Unlike traditional search engines Wolfram Alpha does not search online documents, and thus does not return answers to "fuzzy" questions, such as opinion or advice.
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Original:  In theory, any question with a factual answer could be answered by Wolfram Alpha . category:Computing category:Internet category:Education Category:Worl
Revised:  In theory, any question with a factual answer could be answered by Wolfram Alpha category:Computing category:Internet category:Education Category:Worl
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Original:  In theory, any question with a factual answer could be answered by Wolfram Alpha . category:Computing category:Internet category:Education Category:Worl
Revised:  In theory, any question with a factual answer could be answered by Wolfram Alpha . 
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Original: Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it could not challenge the appeals process of McDonald's Australia  . Council rejected development plans for a 24 hour store at Minyama in December  . " ... council has received legal advice back that McDonalds will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
Revised: Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it will not be able to challenge a McDonald's Australia . Council rejected development plans for a 24 hour store at Minyama in December . " ... council has received legal advice back that McDonalds will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
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Original: Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it could not challenge the appeals process of McDonald's Australia  . Council rejected development plans for a 24 hour store at Minyama in December  . " ... council has received legal advice back that McDonalds will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
Revised: Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it could not challenge the appeals process of McDonald's Australia . Council rejected development plans for a 24-hour store at Minyama in December . " ... council has received legal advice back that McDonalds will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
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Original: Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it could not challenge the appeals process of McDonald's Australia  . Council rejected development plans for a 24 hour store at Minyama in December  . " ... council has received legal advice back that McDonalds will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
Revised: Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it could not challenge the appeals process of McDonald's Australia . Council rejected development plans for a 24 hour store at Minyama in December , and the restaurant giant plans to appeal the decision . " ... council has received legal advice back that McDonalds will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
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Original: Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it could not challenge the appeals process of McDonald's Australia  . Council rejected development plans for a 24 hour store at Minyama in December  . " ... council has received legal advice back that McDonalds will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
Revised: Sunshine Coast Regional Council has received legal advice that it could not challenge the appeals process of McDonald's Australia . Council rejected development plans for a 24 hour store at Minyama in December . " Council has received legal advice back that McDonalds will win because of planning laws allow code assessment - the ugly American McDonald will win and run roughshod over residents and Sunshine Coast Council," said protest group spokesperson John Meyer-Gleaves.
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Original:  Mr Meyer-Gleaves said the group, named Say No To McDonalds, has three priorities if the were forced to negotiate .
Revised:  Meyer-Gleaves said the group, named Say No To McDonalds, has three priorities if the were forced to negotiate .
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Original:  Mr Meyer-Gleaves said the group, named Say No To McDonalds, has three priorities if the were forced to negotiate .
Revised:  Mr Meyer-Gleaves said the group, named Say No To McDonalds, has three priorities if it is forced to negotiate .
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Original:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is  closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours  on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is  built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
Revised:  that the alley between the motel currently on the site and the shop next door is closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
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Original:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is  closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours  on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is  built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
Revised:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is to be closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
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Original:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is  closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours  on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is  built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
Revised:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is closed off, the McDonalds is to operate 24 hours on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
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Original:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is  closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours  on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is  built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
Revised:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours per day on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
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Original:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is  closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours  on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is  built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
Revised:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours on weekends only and a backfence or wall is built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
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Original:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is  closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours  on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is  built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
Revised:  that the alley between motel that currently on the site and the shop next door is closed off, that the store operates at 24 hours on weekends only and that a backfence or wall is to be built at a similar height to other premises fronting Nicklin Way.
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Original:  He claims McDonald's had agrees to them . "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24-hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Chris Thompson, who represents division four in the Sunshine Coast Council , “we have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.
Revised:  McDonald's had agrees to them . "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24-hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Chris Thompson, who represents division four in the Sunshine Coast Council , “we have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.
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Original:  He claims McDonald's had agrees to them . "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24-hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Chris Thompson, who represents division four in the Sunshine Coast Council , “we have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.
Revised:  He claims McDonald's had agrees to them . "I'm pretty sure I'm the only councillor who already has a 24-hour McDonald's in my division," says Councillor Chris Thompson, who represents division four in the Sunshine Coast Council . "We have enough issues with that one, and this is overkill.
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Original:  ” The 24-hour McDonald's in Councillor Thompson's division, in Mooloolaba, is part of a larger complex and does not back onto residential premises.
Revised:  " The 24-hour McDonald's in Councillor Thompson's division, in Mooloolaba, is part of a larger complex and does not back onto residential premises.
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Original:  ” The 24-hour McDonald's in Councillor Thompson's division, in Mooloolaba, is part of a larger complex and does not back onto residential premises.
Revised:  ” The 24-hour McDonald's in Councillor Thompson's division, Mooloolaba, is part of a larger complex and does not back onto residential premises.
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