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Original:  Period: Western Zhou dynasty Date: c. 1046–771 BCE Description: Part of the altar set at Metropolitan Museum of Art.
Revised:  Period: Western Zhou dynasty Date: 1046–771 BCE Description: Part of the altar set at Metropolitan Museum of Art.
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Original:  Period: Later Qing dynasty, Republic period Date: c. 1900–1949 Description: Making copies of old vessels in other materials became a trend in the early part of the twentieth century due to increasing amount of archaeological activity.
Revised:  Period: Later Qing dynasty, Republic period Date: 1900–1949 Description: Making copies of old vessels in other materials became a trend in the early part of the twentieth century due to increasing amount of archaeological activity.
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Original:  Henry Kissinger Revlon Group, American Express Company, Union Pacific Corporation, R. H. Macy and Company Sidney Poitier Walt Disney Company Colin Powell America Online Nancy Reagan Revlon Group Eric Schmidt Apple Beverly Sills Time Warner Samuel Skinner Essential.com Martha Stewart Drugstore.com Table 1 - Notable Celebrity Board Directors
Revised:  Henry Kissinger Revlon Group, American Express Company, Union Pacific Corporation, R. H. Macy and Company Sidney Poitier Walt Disney Company Colin Powell AOL Nancy Reagan Revlon Group Eric Schmidt Apple Beverly Sills Time Warner Samuel Skinner Essential.com Martha Stewart Drugstore.com Table 1 - Notable Celebrity Board Directors
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Original:   He was born in Belleville, Nova Scotia to Augustin and Rose Emma Pothier and became a barrister by career .
Revised:  He was born in Belleville, Nova Scotia to Augustin and Rose Emma Pothier and became a barrister by trade .
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Original:   In 1947, Pottier was appointed a judge at County Court number 1 in Halifax.
Revised:  Judicial career In 1947, Pottier was appointed a judge at County Court number 1 in Halifax.
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Original:  He was the first Acadian from Nova Scotia elected to the House of Commons 
Revised:  He was the first Acadian from Nova Scotia elected to the House of Commons .
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Original:  On January 4, 1965, he became the first Acadian appointed to the Nova Scotia Supreme Court, serving in that role until his retirement after five years. cite web URL publisher=Petit Courrier title=Events of the year 1965|date=January 6, 1966 In his final years, he donated his time supporting the Dalhousie Legal Aid Service.
Revised:  On January 4, 1965, he became the first Acadian appointed to the Nova Scotia Supreme Court, serving in that role until his retirement after five years. In his final years, he donated his time supporting the Dalhousie Legal Aid Service.
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Original:  On January 4 , 1965, he became the first Acadian appointed to the Nova Scotia Supreme Court, serving in that role until his retirement after five years.
Revised:  On 4 , 1965, he became the first Acadian appointed to the Nova Scotia Supreme Court, serving in that role until his retirement after five years.
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Original:  A godet () is an extra piece of fabric in the shape of a circular sector which is set into a garmet , usually a dress or skirt.
Revised:  A godet () is an extra piece of fabric in the shape of a circular sector which is set into a garment , usually a dress or skirt.
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Original:  A godet ( , ) is an extra piece of fabric in the shape of a circular sector which is set into a garment, usually a dress or skirt.
Revised:  A godet ( or ) is an extra piece of fabric in the shape of a circular sector which is set into a garment, usually a dress or skirt.
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Original:  The most popular use of godots is in petticoats.
Revised:  The most popular use of godets is in petticoats.
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Original: Birth and education Mai-Bornu was born in 1919 of Kanuri origin.
Revised: Life Early life and educaton Mai-Bornu was born in 1919 of Kanuri origin.
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Original:  Mai-Bornu taught English at Yola Middle School ( 1942–1946 ) and then Kaduna College (1946– 1954) .
Revised:  He started his teaching career at his alma mater, Yola Middle School ( 1942–1946 ) and then Kaduna College (1946– 1954) .
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Original:  Mai-Bornu taught English at Yola Middle School ( 1942–1946 ) and then Kaduna College (1946– 1954) .
Revised:  Mai-Bornu taught English at Yola Middle School from 1942–1946 ) and then Kaduna College (1946– 1954) .
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Original:  Mai-Bornu taught English at Yola Middle School ( 1942–1946 ) and then Kaduna College (1946– 1954) .
Revised:  Mai-Bornu taught English at Yola Middle School ( 1942–1946 before proceeding to another one of his alma mater's, Kaduna College (1946– 1954) .
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Original:  He then studied Economics at Bristol University in the United Kingdom (1954–1957).
Revised:  He then studied Economics at Bristol University in the United Kingdom graduating in 1957.
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Original:  He was seconded to the Central Bank of Nigeria in 1959 as an Assistant Secretary , rising through the ranks until being appointed Deputy Governor in 1962.
Revised:  He was seconded to the Central Bank of Nigeria as an Assistant Secretary , rising through the ranks until being appointed Deputy Governor in 1962.
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Original:  He was seconded to the Central Bank of Nigeria in 1959 as an Assistant Secretary , rising through the ranks until being appointed Deputy Governor in 1962.
Revised:  He was seconded to the Central Bank of Nigeria in 1959 as an Assistant Secretary . He rapidly rose through the ranks until being appointed Deputy Governor in 1962.
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Original:  Mai-Bornu was  Governor of the Central Bank (1963–1967).
Revised:  Mai-Bornu was appointed Governor of the Central Bank (1963–1967).
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Original:  His portrait features on the 1,000 Naira note brought into circulation of October 12, 2005.
Revised:  His portrait features on the 1,000 Naira note brought into circulation on October 12, 2005.
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Original:  New York: Oxford University Press, 1975. width= 350px|The Roman Empire in c. 400 Barnes, Timothy D. "Imperial Chronology, A.D. 337–350." Phoenix 34:2 (1980): 160–66.
Revised:  New York: Oxford University Press, 1975. 350px|The Roman Empire in c. 400 Barnes, Timothy D. "Imperial Chronology, A.D. 337–350." Phoenix 34:2 (1980): 160–66.
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Original:  Themistius and the Imperial Court: Oratory, Civic Duty, and Paideia from Constantius to Theodosius '' . Ann Arbor: University of Michigan Press, 1995.
Revised:  Themistius and the Imperial Court: Oratory, Civic Duty, and Paideia from Constantius to Theodosius . Ann Arbor: University of Michigan Press, 1995.
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Original: Distribution is fundamentally concerned with ensuring that products reach target customers in the most direct and cost efficient manner.
Revised: Distribution is fundamentally concerned with ensuring that products reach target customers in the most direct and cost-efficient manner.
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Original: Dent, J., Distribution Channels: Understanding and Managing Channels to Market, Kogan Page, 2011, Chapter 1 Although distribution, as a concept, is relatively simple, in practice distribution management may involve a diverse range of activities and disciplines including : detailed logistics, transportation, warehousing, storage, inventory management as well as channel management including selection of channel members and rewarding distributors.
Revised: Dent, J., Distribution Channels: Understanding and Managing Channels to Market, Kogan Page, 2011, Chapter 1 Although distribution, as a concept, is relatively simple, in practice distribution management may involve a diverse range of activities and disciplines including detailed logistics, transportation, warehousing, storage, inventory management as well as channel management including selection of channel members and rewarding distributors.
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Original: Mass distribution (also known as  intensive distribution): When products are destined for a mass market, the marketer will seek out intermediaries that appeal to a broad market base.
Revised: Mass distribution (also known as an intensive distribution): When products are destined for a mass market, the marketer will seek out intermediaries that appeal to a broad market base.
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Original:  In a push strategy, the promotional mix would consist of trade advertising and sales calls while the advertising media would normally be weighted towards trade magazines, exhibitions, and trade shows while a pull strategy would make more extensive use of consumer advertising and sales promotions while the media mix would be weighted towards mass-market media such as newspapers, magazines, television  and radio.
Revised:  In a push strategy, the promotional mix would consist of trade advertising and sales calls while the advertising media would normally be weighted towards trade magazines, exhibitions, and trade shows while a pull strategy would make more extensive use of consumer advertising and sales promotions while the media mix would be weighted towards mass-market media such as newspapers, magazines, television , and radio.
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Original:  When a single organisation uses a variety of different channels to reach its markets, this is known as a multi-channel distribution network.
Revised:  When a single organization uses a variety of different channels to reach its markets, this is known as a multi-channel distribution network.
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Original:  An organisation may need to train staff of intermediaries and motivate the intermediary to sell the firm's products.
Revised:  An organization may need to train staff of intermediaries and motivate the intermediary to sell the firm's products.
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Original:  The emergence of a service-dominant logic perspective has focussed scholarly attention on how distribution networks serve to create customer value and to consider how value is co-created by all the players within the distribution chain, including the value created by customers themselves.
Revised:  The emergence of a service-dominant logic perspective has focused scholarly attention on how distribution networks serve to create customer value and to consider how value is co-created by all the players within the distribution chain, including the value created by customers themselves.
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Original:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centres " are often termed customer fulfillment centres .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilises both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centres "customer fulfillment centres ".
Revised:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centers " are often termed customer fulfillment centres .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilises both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centres "customer fulfillment centres ".
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Original:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centres " are often termed customer fulfillment centres .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilises both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centres "customer fulfillment centres ".
Revised:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centres " are often termed customer fulfillment centers .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilises both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centres "customer fulfillment centres ".
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Original:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centres " are often termed customer fulfillment centres .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilises both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centres "customer fulfillment centres ".
Revised:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centres " are often termed customer fulfillment centres .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilizes both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centres "customer fulfillment centres ".
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Original:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centres " are often termed customer fulfillment centres .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilises both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centres "customer fulfillment centres ".
Revised:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centres " are often termed customer fulfillment centres .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilises both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centers "customer fulfillment centres ".
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Original:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centres " are often termed customer fulfillment centres .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilises both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centres "customer fulfillment centres ".
Revised:  "distribution networks" are often termed value-chains while "distribution centres " are often termed customer fulfillment centres .'' For example, the retail giant Amazon, which utilises both direct online distribution alongside bricks and mortar stores, now calls its distribution centres "customer fulfillment centers ".
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Original:  Pearce, L., “Amazon: Everything You Need to Know about its Plans for Australia,” Huffington Post, 22 August 2017 Although the term, "customer fulfillment centre " has been criticised on the grounds that it is a neologism, its use is becoming increasingly mainstream as it slowly makes its way into introductory marketing textbooks.
Revised:  Pearce, L., “Amazon: Everything You Need to Know about its Plans for Australia,” Huffington Post, 22 August 2017 Although the term, "customer fulfillment center " has been criticised on the grounds that it is a neologism, its use is becoming increasingly mainstream as it slowly makes its way into introductory marketing textbooks.
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Original:  Pearce, L., “Amazon: Everything You Need to Know about its Plans for Australia,” Huffington Post, 22 August 2017 Although the term, "customer fulfillment centre " has been criticised on the grounds that it is a neologism, its use is becoming increasingly mainstream as it slowly makes its way into introductory marketing textbooks.
Revised:  Pearce, L., “Amazon: Everything You Need to Know about its Plans for Australia,” Huffington Post, 22 August 2017 Although the term, "customer fulfillment centre " has been criticized on the grounds that it is a neologism, its use is becoming increasingly mainstream as it slowly makes its way into introductory marketing textbooks.
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Original:  Dr  Scholl orthopedic sandals, for example, only sell their product through pharmacies because this type of intermediary supports the desired therapeutic positioning of the product.
Revised:  Dr . Scholl orthopedic sandals, for example, only sell their product through pharmacies because this type of intermediary supports the desired therapeutic positioning of the product.
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Original:  Track expense and generate financial URL workforce management packages which track attendance, employee absences, human resources issues, payroll, talent management, and labor UR
Revised:  Track expense and generate financial URL workforce management packages which track attendance, employee absences, human resources issues, payroll, talent management, and labor analytics
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Original:  These include lawyers, freelancers ,accountant, consultants, and virtual team .
Revised:  These include lawyers, freelancers and accountants .
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Original: The time-tracking software tool can be used stand-alone or integrated with other applications like project management software, customer support , accounting,communication, help desk and customer relationship management .
Revised: The time-tracking software tool can be used stand-alone or integrated with other applications like project management software, customer support and accounting .
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Original:  Monitoring The system records the active and idle time of employees.
Revised:  Monitoring The system records active and idle time of employees.
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Original:  Since 2006, timesheet software has been moving to mobile platforms (smartphones, tablets, smart watches , etc.) enabling better tracking of employees whose work involves multiple locations.
Revised:  Since 2006, timesheet software has been moving to mobile platforms (smartphones, tablets, smartwatches , etc.) enabling better tracking of employees whose work involves multiple locations.
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Original: She was born in Saint-Éleuthère, Quebec and worked as a farmer and URL Rousseau interrupted her teaching career to raise her children.
Revised: She was born in Saint-Éleuthère, Quebec and worked as a farmer and teacher. Rousseau interrupted her teaching career to raise her children.
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Original:  She returned to the workforce in 1952 as a production supervisor in a textile factory and became active in her union becoming a director on the executive committee of Sherbrooke, Quebec's labour council and then vice-president of the Canadian Federation of Textile Workers and vice-president of the Confédération des syndicats nationaux (CSN), one of Quebec's principal trade union URL
Revised:  She returned to the workforce in 1952 as a production supervisor in a textile factory and became active in her union becoming a director on the executive committee of Sherbrooke, Quebec's labour council and then vice-president of the Canadian Federation of Textile Workers and vice-president of the Confédération des syndicats nationaux (CSN), one of Quebec's principal trade union federations.
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Original: Rock Pidjot ( born November 8, 1907 in Mont-Dore , died November 23, 1990) was a New Caledonian politician.
Revised: Rock Pidjot ( b. November 8, 1907 in Mont-Dore , died November 23, 1990) was a New Caledonian politician.
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Original: Rock Pidjot ( born November 8, 1907 in Mont-Dore , died November 23, 1990) was a New Caledonian politician.
Revised: Rock Pidjot ( born November 8, 1907 in Mont-Dore - d. November 23, 1990) was a New Caledonian politician.
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Original:  His nephew is Charles Pidjot, who also became a politician in New Caledonia
Revised:  His nephew waS Charles Pidjot, who also became a politician in New Caledonia
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Original: Rock Pidjot ( b. November 8, 1907 in Mont-Dore, France - d. November 23, 1990) was a New Caledonian politician.
Revised: Rock Pidjot ( born November 8, 1907 in Mont-Dore, France - d. November 23, 1990) was a New Caledonian politician.
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Original: Rock Pidjot ( b. November 8, 1907 in Mont-Dore, France - d. November 23, 1990) was a New Caledonian politician.
Revised: Rock Pidjot ( b. November 8, 1907 in Mont-Dore, France - November 23, 1990) was a New Caledonian politician.
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Original:  His nephew was Charles Pidjot, who also became a politician in New Caledonia References
Revised:  His nephew was Charles Pidjot, who also became a politician in New Caledonia .
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Original: Charles Pidjot, nickname CharlyPidjot an independent politician Kanak, who was born in the community of Conceptions in Le Mont-Dore (New-Caledonia) 17 July 1962, and who is the president of the Caledonian Union since 8 November 2007.
Revised: Charles 'Charly' Pidjot (17 July 1962 - 11 September 2012) was an independent politician Kanak, who was born in the community of Conceptions in Le Mont-Dore (New-Caledonia) 17 July 1962, and who is the president of the Caledonian Union since 8 November 2007.
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Original: Charles Pidjot, nickname CharlyPidjot an independent politician Kanak, who was born in the community of Conceptions in Le Mont-Dore (New-Caledonia) 17 July 1962, and who is the president of the Caledonian Union since 8 November 2007.
Revised: Charles Pidjot, nickname CharlyPidjot an independent politician from New Caledonia who was a member of the Kanak people. He was born in the community of Conceptions in Le Mont-Dore (New-Caledonia) 17 July 1962, and who is the president of the Caledonian Union since 8 November 2007.
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Original: Charles Pidjot, nickname CharlyPidjot an independent politician Kanak, who was born in the community of Conceptions in Le Mont-Dore (New-Caledonia) 17 July 1962, and who is the president of the Caledonian Union since 8 November 2007.
Revised: Charles Pidjot, nickname CharlyPidjot an independent politician Kanak, who was born in the community of Conceptions in Le Mont-Dore (New-Caledonia) and was the president of the Caledonian Union since 8 November 2007.
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Original: Charles Pidjot, nickname CharlyPidjot an independent politician Kanak, who was born in the community of Conceptions in Le Mont-Dore (New-Caledonia) 17 July 1962, and who is the president of the Caledonian Union since 8 November 2007.
Revised: Charles Pidjot, nickname CharlyPidjot an independent politician Kanak, who was born in the community of Conceptions in Le Mont-Dore (New-Caledonia) 17 July 1962, and who is the president of the Caledonian Union from 8 November 2007.
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Original:  Political heritage He was born to a veritable political dynasty , So he is the cousin of Rock Pidjot, who was an early elected representative of New Caledonia from 1864 to 1986.
Revised:  Political heritage He was born into a veritable political dynasty , So he is the cousin of Rock Pidjot, who was an early elected representative of New Caledonia from 1864 to 1986.
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Original:  Political heritage He was born to a veritable political dynasty , So he is the cousin of Rock Pidjot, who was an early elected representative of New Caledonia from 1864 to 1986.
Revised:  Political heritage He was born to a veritable political dynasty as a relative of Rock Pidjot, who was an early elected representative of New Caledonia from 1864 to 1986.
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Original:  From 1956 to 1985 he also was the first president of Caledonian Union , At the beginnings he was an autonomist, but later became an independentist.
Revised:  From 1956 to 1985 he was the first president of Caledonian Union , At the beginnings he was an autonomist, but later became an independentist.
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Original:  From 1956 to 1985 he also was the first president of Caledonian Union , At the beginnings he was an autonomist, but later became an independentist.
Revised:  From 1956 to 1985 he also was the first president of Caledonian Union . At the beginnings he was an autonomist, but later became an independentist.
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Original:  His brother, Raphaël also became a militarist independentist, and he described himself as the president of the South Pacific Society of Miners.
Revised:  His brother, Raphaël also became a militarist independentis as the president of the South Pacific Society of Miners.
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Original:  He said it up to his and some of his colleagues' death which was caused in 2000 by an accident of their helicopter .
Revised:  He said it up to his and some of his colleagues' death which was caused in 2000 in a helicopter accident .
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