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Original: Biography Born to prostitution, she started her career as a courtesan and at age twelve  she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
Revised: Biography Born to prostitution, she started her career at age twelve she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
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Original: Biography Born to prostitution, she started her career as a courtesan and at age twelve  she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
Revised: Biography Born to prostitution, she started her career as a courtesan and at age twelve , she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
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Original: Biography  she started her career  at age twelve , she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
Revised: Biography she started her career at age twelve she played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
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Original: Indian female prostitutes Category: Theatre in India Category: Women autobiographers Category:19th-century Indian actresses Category:20th-century Indian actresses Category:People of British India Category:19th-century Indian women writers Category:19th-century Indian writers Category:Indian women non-fiction writers Category:Women biographers Category:19th-century Indian biographers Category:Women writers from West Bengal Category:Actresses from Kolkata Category:20th-century Indian biographe
Revised: Indian female prostitutes Category: Women autobiographers Category:19th-century Indian actresses Category:20th-century Indian actresses Category:People of British India Category:19th-century Indian women writers Category:19th-century Indian writers Category:Indian women non-fiction writers Category:Women biographers Category:19th-century Indian biographers Category:Women writers from West Bengal Category:Actresses from Kolkata Category:20th-century Indian biographe
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Original: Biography Born to prostitution, she started her career as a courtesan and at age twelve she played her first serious drama role  in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
Revised: Biography She played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
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Original: Biography She played her first serious drama role at the age of 12 in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
Revised: Biography She played her first serious drama role in Calcutta's National Theatre in 1874, under the mentorship of its founder, Girish Chandra Ghosh.
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Original: Binodini Dasi (1863–1941), also known as Notee Binodini, was a Calcutta-based, Bengali-speaking renowned actress and thespian.
Revised: Binodini Dasi (1863–1941), also known as Notee Binodini, was an Indian Bengali actress and thespian.
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Original:    Issues with the theory As of yet, there is little published criticism of the P-FIT . . Nevertheless, questions remain regarding the biological functioning of intelligence.
Revised:  Issues with the theory As of yet, there is little published criticism of the P-FIT . Nevertheless, questions remain regarding the biological functioning of intelligence.
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Original: Issues with the theory As of yet, there is little published criticism of the P-FIT.
Revised: Issues with the theory There is little published criticism of the P-FIT.
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Original:  Although this review does not directly criticize the P-FIT in particular , the authors caution that structural imaging and lesion studies, although helpful in implicating specific regions in processes, do little to elucidate the dynamical nature of cognitive processes.
Revised:  Although this review does not directly criticize the P-FIT , the authors caution that structural imaging and lesion studies, although helpful in implicating specific regions in processes, do little to elucidate the dynamical nature of cognitive processes.
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Original:  Reprinted by permission from Macmillan Publishers Ltd: Nature Reviews Neuroscience copyright (2010) Neuroimaging evidence
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Original:  This finding was contrary to the predictions of the P-FIT were attributed by the authors to the task-dependency of relationships between intellectual performance and these lobes.
Revised:  The authors attribute this contradictory finding to the task-dependency of relationships between intellectual performance and these lobes.
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Original:  The theory proposes that that a network of brain regions, including regions within frontal, parietal, temporal, and cingulate cortices, underlie the biological basis of human intelligence.
Revised:  The theory proposes that large scale brain networks connect brain regions, including regions within frontal, parietal, temporal, and cingulate cortices, underlie the biological basis of human intelligence.
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Original: Tasks are based off of experimental conditions or reported instances in which social learning is used.
Revised: Tasks are based on experimental conditions or reported instances in which social learning is used.
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Original: As in humans, there are many way to measure intelligence in non-human animals.
Revised: As in humans, there are many ways in which to measure intelligence in non-human animals.
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Original: The g factor, or general factor, of intelligence is a psychometric construct that summarizes the correlations observed between an individual’s scores on various measures of cognitive abilities.
Revised: The g factor, or general factor, of intelligence is a psychometric construct that summarizes observed correlations between an individual’s scores on various measures of cognitive abilities.
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Original:  First described in humans, the g factor has since been identified in a number of non-human species.
Revised:  First described in humans, a g factor has since been identified in a number of non-human species.
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Original:  There is a wide range between species in the amount of variance explained by g , suggesting that they may be differentially reliant on a general factor.
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Original: The vast majority of measures of differences in g in humans, any of a wide range of IQ tests, are heavily reliant on language and verbal ability .
Revised: Most measures of g in humans, any of a wide range of IQ tests, are heavily reliant on language and verbal ability .
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Original: The vast majority of measures of differences in g in humans, any of a wide range of IQ tests, are heavily reliant on language and verbal ability .
Revised: The vast majority of measures of differences in g in humans, including most IQ tests, are heavily reliant on language and verbal ability .
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Original: The vast majority of measures of differences in g in humans, any of a wide range of IQ tests, are heavily reliant on language and verbal ability .
Revised: The vast majority of measures of differences in g in humans, any of a wide range of IQ tests, rely heavily on language and verbal ability .
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Original:  Several alternative measures have been developed specifically to measure IQ in non-humans.
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Original:  IQ measures in non-humans%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% As in humans, there are many ways in which to measure intelligence in non-human animals.
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Original:  A battery of tests is often used and measures from multiple categories are taken to provide a more comprehensive assessment .
Revised:  A battery of tests involving several sorts of behavior .
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Original:  Innovation & problem solving Innovation and problem solving tasks are the most similar to human IQ tests and are the most widely used experimental measure of non-human intelligence.
Revised:  Innovation & problem solving Innovation and problem solving tasks are the most widely used experimental measure of non-human intelligence.
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Original:  Innovation & problem solving Innovation and problem solving tasks are the most similar to human IQ tests and are the most widely used experimental measure of non-human intelligence.
Revised:  Innovation & problem solving Innovation and problem solving tasks are the most similar to human IQ tests and are the most widely used experimental measures of non-human intelligence.
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Original:  These may include tasksexamining memoryand spatial reasoning, visual and auditory discrimination tasks , and object manipulation puzzles .Banerjee, K., Chabris, C. F., Johnson, V. E., Lee, J. J., Tsao, F., & Hauser, M. D. (2009).
Revised:  These may include tasksexamining memoryand spatial reasoning, visual and auditory discrimination , and object manipulation puzzles .Banerjee, K., Chabris, C. F., Johnson, V. E., Lee, J. J., Tsao, F., & Hauser, M. D. (2009).
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Original:  These may include tasksexamining memoryand spatial reasoning, visual and auditory discrimination tasks , and object manipulation puzzles .Banerjee, K., Chabris, C. F., Johnson, V. E., Lee, J. J., Tsao, F., & Hauser, M. D. (2009).
Revised:  These may include tasksexamining memoryand spatial reasoning, visual and auditory discrimination tasks , and object manipulation .Banerjee, K., Chabris, C. F., Johnson, V. E., Lee, J. J., Tsao, F., & Hauser, M. D. (2009).
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Original:  Instances of novel solutions to everyday problems or the use of tools to achieve a goal , for example, termite fishing in chimpanzees or nut cracking in robust capuchins , can be used as indicators of innovation.
Revised:  Instances of novel solutions to everyday problems or the use of tools to achieve a goal . Instances include termite fishing in chimpanzees or nut cracking in robust capuchins , can be used as indicators of innovation.
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Original:  These in turn can be used to measure intelligence in a naturalistic and ecologically validway ]]  without the need for experimentation.
Revised:  These in turn can be used to measure intelligence in a naturalistic and ecologically validway ]] measures without the need for experimentation.
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Original:  The amount of interest shown to novel objects and the about of time spent exploring a novel environment correlate with intelligence later in life in humans . Responses to novelty in non-humans are thought to correlate similarly, though it can often be difficult to quantify this measure appropriately.
Revised:  , for the amount of interest shown to novel objects and the about of time spent exploring a novel environment correlate with intelligence later in life in humans . Responses to novelty in non-humans are thought to correlate similarly, though it can often be difficult to quantify this measure appropriately.
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Original:  The amount of interest shown to novel objects and the about of time spent exploring a novel environment correlate with intelligence later in life in humans . Responses to novelty in non-humans are thought to correlate similarly, though it can often be difficult to quantify this measure appropriately.
Revised:  The amount of interest in novel objects and the about of time spent exploring a novel environment correlate with intelligence later in life in humans . Responses to novelty in non-humans are thought to correlate similarly, though it can often be difficult to quantify this measure appropriately.
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Original:  The amount of interest shown to novel objects and the about of time spent exploring a novel environment correlate with intelligence later in life in humans . Responses to novelty in non-humans are thought to correlate similarly, though it can often be difficult to quantify this measure appropriately.
Revised:  The amount of interest shown to novel objects and the time spent exploring a novel environment correlate with intelligence later in life in humans . Responses to novelty in non-humans are thought to correlate similarly, though it can often be difficult to quantify this measure appropriately.
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Original:  The amount of interest shown to novel objects and the about of time spent exploring a novel environment correlate with intelligence later in life in humans . Responses to novelty in non-humans are thought to correlate similarly, though it can often be difficult to quantify this measure appropriately.
Revised:  The amount of interest shown to novel objects and the about of time spent exploring a novel environment correlate with intelligence later in life . Responses to novelty in non-humans are thought to correlate similarly, though it can often be difficult to quantify this measure appropriately.
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Original:  Habit reversal and inhibition are also commonly used in primate intelligencetesting .
Revised:  Habit reversal and inhibition are commonly used to test primate intelligence .
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Original:  These tasks require the repression of a learned response or instinctive action in order to receive a reward.
Revised:  These tasks require the animal to suppress a learned response or instinctive action in order to receive a reward.
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Original:  An exampleof such a task is the detour problem .
Revised:  For example, in the detour problem .
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Original:  A food reward is placed behind an obstacle and which must be navigated via an indirect route to the goal .Kohler, W. (1927).
Revised:  A food reward is placed behind an obstacle must be retrieved by following an indirect route to the goal .Kohler, W. (1927).
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Original:  A food reward is placed behind an obstacle and which must be navigated via an indirect route to the goal .Kohler, W. (1927).
Revised:  A food reward is placed behind an obstacle and which must be navigated via an indirect route .Kohler, W. (1927).
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Original:  New York: Harcourt The subject must inhibit its desire to move straight towards the goal and instead move away to get around the obstacle.
Revised:  New York: Harcourt To do this, the subject must inhibit its desire to move straight towards the goal and instead move away to get around the obstacle.
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Original:  New York: Harcourt The subject must inhibit its desire to move straight towards the goal and instead move away to get around the obstacle.
Revised:  New York: Harcourt The subject must inhibit its tendency to move straight towards the goal and instead move away to get around the obstacle.
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Original:  New York: Harcourt The subject must inhibit its desire to move straight towards the goal and instead move away to get around the obstacle.
Revised:  New York: Harcourt The subject must inhibit its desire to move straight towards the goal .
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Original:  Social learning Tasks are based on experimental conditions or reported instances in which social learningis used .
Revised:  Social learning A number of intelligence tests for animals include social learning .
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Original:  The more an individual participates in and gains from social learning, the higher their intelligence is judged to be.
Revised:  The more an individual participates in and gains from social learning, the higher its intelligence is judged to be.
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Original:  This is data is more widely available for primates and does not require specifically designed experiments.
Revised:  Such data are most widely available for primates and does not require specifically designed experiments.
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Original:  It also is more ecologically valid than some other measures , often occurring in wild populations as well .
Revised:  It also is more ecologically valid than some other measures .
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Original:  The basis for inclusion in IQ studies centers around the theory of cultural intelligence.van Schaik, C. P., & Burkart, J. M. (2011).
Revised:  One basis for their inclusion in IQ studies centers around the theory of cultural intelligence.van Schaik, C. P., & Burkart, J. M. (2011).
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Original:  It is can be difficult to maximize efficient use of the operating room when unexpected delays can happen and lead to patients waiting.
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Original: Patients perception of waiting time is often more important that actual waiting time.
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Original: Waiting for healthcare refers to any waiting period which a patient experiences before or during medical treatment.
Revised: Waiting for healthcare refers to any waiting period experienced by a patient before or during medical treatment.
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Original:  Waiting to get an appointment with a doctor , staying in a waiting room before an appointment, and being observed during a physician's watchful waiting are different concepts in waiting for healthcare.
Revised:  Waiting to get an appointment with a physician , staying in a waiting room before an appointment, and being observed during a physician's watchful waiting are different concepts in waiting for healthcare.
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Original:  It can be difficult to maximize efficient use of the operating room when unexpected delays can happen and lead to patients waiting .
Revised:  It can be difficult to maximize efficient use of the operating room when unexpected delays can happen and lead to patients waiting 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Patients can spend longer waiting for treatment than actually receiving treatment.
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Original:  Time in the waiting room has been used to experiment with giving patient health education .
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Original: Children having fun playing with snow  Surfers enjoying their sport  Fun is defined by the Oxford English Dictionary as "Light-hearted pleasure, enjoyment, or amusement;
Revised: Children having fun playing with snow . Surfers enjoying their sport Fun is defined by the Oxford English Dictionary as "Light-hearted pleasure, enjoyment, or amusement;
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Original: Children having fun playing with snow  Surfers enjoying their sport  Fun is defined by the Oxford English Dictionary as "Light-hearted pleasure, enjoyment, or amusement;
Revised: Children having fun playing with snow Surfers enjoying their sport . Fun is defined by the Oxford English Dictionary as "Light-hearted pleasure, enjoyment, or amusement;
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Original: Children having fun playing with snow . Surfers enjoying their sport .
Revised: Children having fun playing with snow Surfers enjoying their sport .
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Original: Children having fun playing with snow . Surfers enjoying their sport .
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Original:  Psychology Employment poster about the importance of fun .|link=File:\%22Fun,_off_the_job_keeps_him_on_the_Job\%22_-_NARA_-_514789.jpg According to Johan Huizinga, fun is "an absolutely primary category of life, familiar to everybody at a glance right down to the animal level." Psychological studies reveal both the importance of fun and its effect on the perception of time, which is sometimes said to be shortened when one is having fun.
Revised:  Psychology Employment poster about the importance of fun According to Johan Huizinga, fun is "an absolutely primary category of life, familiar to everybody at a glance right down to the animal level." Psychological studies reveal both the importance of fun and its effect on the perception of time, which is sometimes said to be shortened when one is having fun.
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Original: Etymology and usage The word fun is associated with sports, sexual activity, entertaining media, high merriment, and amusement.
Revised: Etymology and usage The word fun is associated with sports, entertaining media, high merriment, and amusement.
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Original:  Although particularly associated with recreation and play, fun may be encountered during work, social functions, and in daily life .
Revised:  Although particularly associated with recreation and play, it may be encountered during work, social functions, and in daily life .
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Original:  Although particularly associated with recreation and play, fun may be encountered during work, social functions, and in daily life .
Revised:  Although particularly associated with recreation and play, fun may be encountered during working time .
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Original:  Although particularly associated with recreation and play, it may be encountered during working time.
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Original: Nafa Indria Urbach (born in Magelang, June 15 , 1980), better known as Nafa Urbach, an Indonesian soap opera actress and singer.
Revised: Nafa Indria Urbach (born in Magelang, 15 , 1980), better known as Nafa Urbach, an Indonesian soap opera actress and singer.
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Original: Biography Nafa Indria Urbach was born June 15 , 1980 in Magelang to Ronald Urbach and Neneng Maria Kusuma.
Revised: Biography Nafa Indria Urbach was born 15 , 1980 in Magelang to Ronald Urbach and Neneng Maria Kusuma.
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Original: PRIMUS JAUH LEBIH MAHAL" Nafa married the actor Zack Lee in Jakarta on February 16 , 2007.
Revised: PRIMUS JAUH LEBIH MAHAL" Nafa married the actor Zack Lee in Jakarta on 16 , 2007.
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Original: Nafa Urbach Batal Punya Anak She gave birth on February 8 , 2011 to a daughter, Mikhaela Lee Jowono.
Revised: Nafa Urbach Batal Punya Anak She gave birth on 8 , 2011 to a daughter, Mikhaela Lee Jowono.
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Original:   Javanese people Category:
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Original:  Nafa is the third of the couple's fourth children;
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Original: Happy accidents Nafa was in a relationship with Iranian-Indonesian actor , who has made appearances in several of these music videos like "Hatiku Bagai Terpenjara", "Hatiku Bagai Di Sangkar Emas", "Bilakah" or also "Tiada Dusta Di Hatiku", from 1997 to 2001."
Revised: Happy accidents Nafa was in a relationship with Iranian-Indonesian actor , who has made appearances in these music videos like "Hatiku Bagai Terpenjara", "Hatiku Bagai Di Sangkar Emas", "Bilakah" or also "Tiada Dusta Di Hatiku", from 1997 to 2001."
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Original: Happy accidents Nafa was in a relationship with Iranian-Indonesian actor , who has made appearances in several of these music videos like "Hatiku Bagai Terpenjara", "Hatiku Bagai Di Sangkar Emas", "Bilakah" or also "Tiada Dusta Di Hatiku", from 1997 to 2001."
Revised: Happy accidents Nafa was in a relationship with Iranian-Indonesian actor , who has made appearances in several of these music videos : "Hatiku Bagai Terpenjara", "Hatiku Bagai Di Sangkar Emas", "Bilakah" or also "Tiada Dusta Di Hatiku", from 1997 to 2001."
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