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Original: Merkur 1985Conceptions of soul in old-Estonian religion (Vol. 4) written by Tarmo Kulmar Sometimes, a shaman's "free soul" may be held to be able to undertake a spirit journey.
Revised: Merkur 1985 Sometimes, a shaman's "free soul" may be held to be able to undertake a spirit journey.
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Original:  Examples  Austronesian peoples The belief in soul dualism found throughout most Austronesian shamanistic traditions.
Revised:  Examples The belief in soul dualism found throughout most Austronesian shamanistic traditions.
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Original:  Chinese Traditional Chinese culture differentiates two hun and po spirits or souls, which correlate with yang and yin respectively.
Revised:  China Traditional Chinese culture differentiates two hun and po spirits or souls, which correlate with yang and yin respectively.
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Original:  Uralic peoples The concept of more kinds of souls can be found also at several Finno-Ugric peoples.
Revised:  Ural The concept of more kinds of souls can be found also at several Finno-Ugric peoples.
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Original: Fodor  2005 : 16–17 See notion of shadow-soul (being able to depart freely the body), e.g. “íz” in Hungarian folk beliefs.
Revised: Fodor ( 2005 : 16–17 See notion of shadow-soul (being able to depart freely the body), e.g. “íz” in Hungarian folk beliefs.
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Original: Fodor  2005 : 16–17 See notion of shadow-soul (being able to depart freely the body), e.g. “íz” in Hungarian folk beliefs.
Revised: Fodor 2005 ) p. 16–17 See notion of shadow-soul (being able to depart freely the body), e.g. “íz” in Hungarian folk beliefs.
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Original: Dienes  1975 : 83 The concept of a dualistic shadow-soul called itse, related to the Hungarian conception, is also part of Finnish and general Baltic-Finnic folklore.
Revised: Dienes ( 1975 : 83 The concept of a dualistic shadow-soul called itse, related to the Hungarian conception, is also part of Finnish and general Baltic-Finnic folklore.
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Original: Dienes  1975 : 83 The concept of a dualistic shadow-soul called itse, related to the Hungarian conception, is also part of Finnish and general Baltic-Finnic folklore.
Revised: Dienes 1975 ) p. 83 The concept of a dualistic shadow-soul called itse, related to the Hungarian conception, is also part of Finnish and general Baltic-Finnic folklore.
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Original: Soul dualism  or multiple souls  is a range of beliefs that a person has two or more kinds of souls.
Revised: Soul dualism or multiple souls , is a range of beliefs that a person has two or more kinds of souls.
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Original:  Hoppál (1975) p. 225Hoppál (1994) p. 13Diószegi (1962) p. 27 Sometimes the plethora of soul types can be even more complex.
Revised:  Sometimes the plethora of soul types can be even more complex.
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Original:  Merkur 1985 Sometimes, a shaman's "free soul" may be held to be able to undertake a spirit journey.
Revised:  Sometimes, a shaman's "free soul" may be held to be able to undertake a spirit journey.
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Original:  The "free soul" is said to leave the body and journey to the spirit world during sleep, trance-like states, delirium, insanity, and death .
Revised:  The "free soul" is said to leave the body and journey to the spirit world during trance-like states, delirium, insanity, and death .
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Original:  The "free soul" is said to leave the body and journey to the spirit world during sleep, trance-like states, delirium, insanity, and death .
Revised:  The "free soul" is said to leave the body and journey to the spirit world during sleep, trance-like states, sleep, delirium, death, and insanity .
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Original:  Like among the Tagbanwa people , where a person is said to have six souls - the "free soul" (which is regarded as the "true" soul) and five secondary souls with various functions.
Revised:  Like among the Tagbanwa , where a person is said to have six souls - the "free soul" (which is regarded as the "true" soul) and five secondary souls with various functions.
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Original:  Inuit Kalbo Inuit groups believe that a person has more than one type of soul.
Revised:  Inuit Several Inuit groups believe that a person has more than one type of soul.
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Original:  Kleivan Sonne (1985) pp. 17–18 In some cases, it is connected to shamanistic beliefs among the various Inuit groups.
Revised:  Sonne (1985) pp. 17–18 In some cases, it is connected to shamanistic beliefs among the various Inuit groups.
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Original:  Kleivan Sonne (1985) pp. 17–18 In some cases, it is connected to shamanistic beliefs among the various Inuit groups.
Revised:  Kleivan In some cases, it is connected to shamanistic beliefs among the various Inuit groups.
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Original:  Merkur (1985) pp. 61, 222–223, 226, 240 Also Caribou Inuit groups believed in several types of souls.
Revised:  Also Caribou Inuit groups believed in several types of souls.
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Original:  Gabus (1970) p. 211 Ural The concept of more kinds of souls can be found also at several Finno-Ugric peoples.
Revised:  Ural The concept of more kinds of souls can be found also at several Finno-Ugric peoples.
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Original:  Fodor (2005) p. 16–17 See notion of shadow-soul (being able to depart freely the body), e.g. “íz” in Hungarian folk beliefs.
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Original:  Fodor (2005) p. 16–17 See notion of shadow-soul (being able to depart freely the body), e.g. “íz” in Hungarian folk beliefs.
Revised:  Fodor (2005) p. 16–17 See notion of shadow-soul (being able to depart freely the body), e.g. in Hungarian folk beliefs.
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Original:  Dienes (1975) p. 83 The concept of a dualistic shadow-soul called itse, related to the Hungarian conception, is also part of Finnish and general Baltic-Finnic folklore.
Revised:  The concept of a dualistic shadow-soul called itse, related to the Hungarian conception, is also part of Finnish and general Baltic-Finnic folklore.
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Original:  The Estonian soul concept has been approached by several authors, some of them using rather complex frameworks (online )
Revised:  The Estonian soul concept has been approached by several authors, some of them using rather complex frameworks 
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Original: Ural The concept of more kinds of souls can be found also at several Finno-Ugric peoples .
Revised: Ural The concept of more kinds of souls can be found also at several Finnic .
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Original: Ural The concept of more kinds of souls can be found also at several Finnic .
Revised: Ural The concept of more kinds of souls can be found also in Finnish paganism .
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Original:  He completed his secondary education at Accra Academy  in 1939.
Revised:  He had his secondary education at Accra Academy in 1939.
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Original:  He has also been a president of the National Olympic Committee of Ghana.
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Original: Perennial: The one which flows continuously.
Revised: Perennial: The one which can (will) flow continuously.
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Original: Perennial: The one which can (will) flow continuously.
Revised: Perennial: The one which flows continuously.
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Original: A perennial stream or perennial river is a stream or river (channel) which has constant stream throughout the year through  parts of its stream bed during years of normal rainfall.
Revised: A perennial stream or perennial river is a stream or river (channel) which has a flow of water throughout the year through parts of its stream bed during years of normal rainfall.
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Original: A perennial stream or perennial river is a stream or river (channel) which has constant stream throughout the year through  parts of its stream bed during years of normal rainfall.
Revised: A perennial stream or perennial river is a stream or river (channel) which has constant stream throughout the year through at least parts of its stream bed during years of normal rainfall.
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Original:  For example, an artificial disruption of stream, variability in flow or stream selection associated with the activity in hydropower installations, shall not affect the measurement . Perennial streams do not consist of stagnant waterfor the wetlands , reservoirs, and ponds that occur all the period .
Revised:  For example, an artificial disruption of stream, variability in flow or stream selection associated with the activity in hydropower installations, do not affect this status . Perennial streams do not consist of stagnant waterfor the wetlands , reservoirs, and ponds that occur all the period .
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Original:  For example, an artificial disruption of stream, variability in flow or stream selection associated with the activity in hydropower installations, shall not affect the measurement . Perennial streams do not consist of stagnant waterfor the wetlands , reservoirs, and ponds that occur all the period .
Revised:  For example, an artificial disruption of stream, variability in flow or stream selection associated with the activity in hydropower installations, shall not affect the measurement . Perennial streams do not include stagnant water , reservoirs, and ponds that occur all the period .
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Original:  For example, an artificial disruption of stream, variability in flow or stream selection associated with the activity in hydropower installations, shall not affect the measurement . Perennial streams do not consist of stagnant waterfor the wetlands , reservoirs, and ponds that occur all the period .
Revised:  For example, an artificial disruption of stream, variability in flow or stream selection associated with the activity in hydropower installations, shall not affect the measurement . Perennial streams do not consist of stagnant waterfor the wetlands , reservoirs, and ponds that persist throughout the year .
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Original:  All other streams, or portions thereof , should be considered seasonal rivers or lakes.
Revised:  All other streams, or parts of them , should be considered seasonal rivers or lakes.
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Original:  The stream can cycle from broken to perpetual through multiple iterations , to intermittent through its mechanism.
Revised:  The stream can cycle from intermittent to perpetual through multiple iterations , to intermittent through its mechanism.
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Original:  Most of this water re-enters the atmosphere either by evaporating from soil and water bodies, or by plant evapotranspiration.
Revised:  Most of this water re-enters the atmosphere either by evaporation from soil and water bodies, or by plant evapotranspiration.
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Original:  The majority of the water flows as a runoff off the ground, the proportion of which varies depending on several factors, such as climate, temperature, vegetation, types of rock, and relief.
Revised:  The majority of the water flows as a runoff from the ground; the proportion of which varies depending on several factors, such as climate, temperature, vegetation, types of rock, and relief.
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Original:  The majority of the water flows as a runoff off the ground, the proportion of which varies depending on several factors, such as climate, temperature, vegetation, types of rock, and relief.
Revised:  The majority of the water flows as a runoff off the ground, the proportion of this varies depending on several factors, such as climate, temperature, vegetation, types of rock, and relief.
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Original:  Freshwater's primary sources are precipitation , and mountain snowmelt.
Revised:  Freshwater's primary sources are precipitation and mountain snowmelt.
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Original:  Using the model for comparison in two basins in Tibet (Helongqu and Niyang River White Water) in Tibet , the results show that the critical support flow (Qc) of the is 0.002 8 m3/s.
Revised:  Using the model for comparison in two basins in Tibet (Helongqu and Niyang River White Water) , the results show that the critical support flow (Qc) of the is 0.002 8 m3/s.
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Original:  The river's source is the river 's point of origin .
Revised:  The source of a river or stream (its point of origin .
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Original:  A typical river consists of several tributaries, and each arm may be made up of several other smaller tributaries, so that together this stream and all its tributaries are called a drainage network.
Revised:  A typical river has several tributaries; each of these may be made up of several other smaller tributaries, so that together this stream and all its tributaries are called a drainage network.
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Original:  international practice is to take the source farthest from the end as the source of the entire river system, from which the most extended length of the river measured as the starting point is taken as the length of the whole river system . Generally speaking, the source of a river system will be at the beginning of the current or its upper reaches, where the river length is synonymous with the size of the river systemunless otherwise specified .
Revised:  international practice is to take the source farthest from the river mouth as the source of the entire river system, from which the most extended length of the river measured as the starting point is taken as the length of the whole river system . Generally speaking, the source of a river system will be at the beginning of the current or its upper reaches, where the river length is synonymous with the size of the river systemunless otherwise specified .
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Original:  international practice is to take the source farthest from the end as the source of the entire river system, from which the most extended length of the river measured as the starting point is taken as the length of the whole river system . Generally speaking, the source of a river system will be at the beginning of the current or its upper reaches, where the river length is synonymous with the size of the river systemunless otherwise specified .
Revised:  international practice is to take the source farthest from the end as the source of the entire river system, from which the most extended length of the river measured as the starting point is taken as the length of the whole river system Generally speaking, the source of a river system will be at the beginning of the current or its upper reaches, where the river length is synonymous with the size of the river systemunless otherwise specified .
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Original:  international practice is to take the source farthest from the end as the source of the entire river system, from which the most extended length of the river measured as the starting point is taken as the length of the whole river system . Generally speaking, the source of a river system will be at the beginning of the current or its upper reaches, where the river length is synonymous with the size of the river systemunless otherwise specified .
Revised:  international practice is to take the source farthest from the end as the source of the entire river system, from which the most extended length of the river measured as the starting point is taken as the length of the whole river system . , and that furthest starting point is conventionally taken as the source of a river system will be at the beginning of the current or its upper reaches, where the river length is synonymous with the size of the river systemunless otherwise specified .
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Original:  international practice is to take the source farthest from the end as the source of the entire river system, from which the most extended length of the river measured as the starting point is taken as the length of the whole river system . Generally speaking, the source of a river system will be at the beginning of the current or its upper reaches, where the river length is synonymous with the size of the river systemunless otherwise specified .
Revised:  international practice is to take the source farthest from the end as the source of the entire river system, from which the most extended length of the river measured as the starting point is taken as the length of the whole river system . Generally speaking, the source of the whole river system .
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Original:  For example, the origin of the Nile River is the confluence of the White Nile and the Blue Nile, and the source of the whole river system is in its upper reaches.
Revised:  For example, the origin of the Nile River is the confluence of the White Nile and the Blue Nile, but the source of the whole river system is in its upper reaches.
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Original:  If there is no specific designation, " Nile length " refers to  "river length of the Nile system , "  rather than to the length of the Nile river  .
Revised:  If there is no specific designation, " length of the Nile " refers to "river length of the Nile system , " rather than to the length of the Nile river .
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Original:  If there is no specific designation, " Nile length " refers to  "river length of the Nile system , "  rather than to the length of the Nile river  .
Revised:  If there is no specific designation, " Nile length " refers to the "river length of the Nile system , " rather than to the length of the Nile river .
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Original:  If there is no specific designation, " Nile length " refers to  "river length of the Nile system , "  rather than to the length of the Nile river  .
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Original:  If there is no specific designation, " Nile length " refers to  "river length of the Nile system , "  rather than to the length of the Nile river  .
Revised:  If there is no specific designation, " Nile length " refers to "river length of the Nile system , " , rather than to the length of the Nile river .
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Original:  The Nile's source is often known as Lake Victoria, but the lake has significant feeder rivers.
Revised:  The Nile's source is often cited as Lake Victoria, but the lake has significant feeder rivers.
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Original:  The Kagera River, which flows into Lake Victoria near Bukoba's Tanzanian town, is the longest feeder, though sources do not cooperate on which is the Kagera's longest tributary and therefore the Nile's most remote source itself.
Revised:  The Kagera River, which flows into Lake Victoria near Bukoba's Tanzanian town, is the longest feeder, though sources do not agree on which is the Kagera's longest tributary and therefore the Nile's most remote source itself.
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Original: Vertebrates Fish and amphibians are secondary indicators when it comes to assessing for a perennial stream because some fish and amphibians can inhabit areas without persistent water regime.
Revised: Vertebrates Fish and amphibians are secondary indicators in assessment of a perennial stream because some fish and amphibians can inhabit areas without persistent water regime.
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Original:  Fish will seek cover if alerted to human presence  but should be easily observed in perennial streams.
Revised:  Fish will seek cover if alerted to human presence , but should be easily observed in perennial streams.
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Original:  Amphibians also indicate a perennial stream and range from tadpoles, frogs, salamanders, and newts.
Revised:  Amphibians also indicate a perennial stream and include tadpoles, frogs, salamanders, and newts.
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Original:  These amphibians can be found in stream channels, along streambanks , and even under rocks.
Revised:  These amphibians can be found in stream channels, along stream banks , and even under rocks.
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Original: Geological indicators Well defined river beds composed of riffles, pools, runs, gravel bars, a bed armor layer, and other depositional features, plus well defined banks due to bank erosion  are good identifiers when assessing for perennial streams.
Revised: Geological indicators Well defined river beds composed of riffles, pools, runs, gravel bars, a bed armor layer, and other depositional features, plus well defined banks due to bank erosion , are good identifiers when assessing for perennial streams.
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Original:  Perennial streams cut through the soil profile  which removes fine and small particles.
Revised:  Perennial streams cut through the soil profile , which removes fine and small particles.
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Original:  In Wales the Pumlumon Large Area Conservation Project focusses on upland conservation in areas of marginal agriculture and URL The North Somerset Levels and Moors Project addresses wetlands.
Revised:  In Wales the Pumlumon Large Area Conservation Project focusses on upland conservation in areas of marginal agriculture and forestry. The North Somerset Levels and Moors Project addresses wetlands.
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Original:  New Zealand's marine environment is more than 15 times larger than its terrestrial area, however only 9.5\% of New Zealand's territorial waters are in marine reserves, while 0.4\% of New Zealand's exclusive economic zone (EEZ) is currently protected . British Indian Ocean Territory Chagos Marine Reserve is the largest 'no take' marine reserve with more than 540,000 km2 It is said to be one of the world's richest marine ecosystems.
Revised:  New Zealand's marine environment is more than 15 times larger than its terrestrial area, however only 9.5\% of New Zealand's territorial waters are in marine reserves, while 0.4\% of New Zealand's exclusive economic zone (EEZ) is currently protected British Indian Ocean Territory Chagos Marine Reserve is the largest 'no take' marine reserve with more than 540,000 km2 It is said to be one of the world's richest marine ecosystems.
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Original:  These are 'no take' areas where all forms of exploitation are prohibited.
Revised:  These are 'no take' areas where all forms of extractive activities are prohibited.
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Original:  "By the beginning of the 19th century," Brent writes , "the attack on the whole appalling business had sharpened, and Africa had become the subject of the day.
Revised:  "By the beginning of the 19th century," Brent wrote , "the attack on the whole appalling business had sharpened, and Africa had become the subject of the day.
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Original:  The relentless efforts of the African Association over forty-three years certainly contributed to this enlightenment.
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Original: Organized by a dozen titled members of London's upper-class establishment and led by Sir Joseph Banks, the African Association felt that it was the great failing of the Age of Enlightenment that, in a time when men could sail around the world, the geography of the Dark Continent remained almost entirely uncharted  .
Revised: Organized by a dozen titled members of London's upper-class establishment and led by Sir Joseph Banks, the African Association felt that it was the great failing of the Age of Enlightenment that, in a time when men could sail around the world, the geography of Africa remained almost entirely uncharted .
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