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Original: Subodh Chandra Basu Mallik (9 February 1879 – 14 November 1920), commonly known as Raja Subodh Mallik, was a Bengali Indian Industrialist, Philanthropist and nationalist.
Revised: Subodh Chandra Basu Mallik (9 February 1879 – 14 November 1920), commonly known as Raja Subodh Mallik, was a Bengali Indian industrialist, philanthropist and nationalist.
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Original:  BANDE MATARAM Newspaper Further reading Raja Subodh Chandra Mallik and his times.
Revised:  Bande Mataram newspaper Further reading Raja Subodh Chandra Mallik and his times.
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Original:   Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian  National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:19th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicia
Revised:  19th-century Indian educators Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian politicians Category: Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:19th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicia
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Original:   Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian  National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:19th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicia
Revised:  Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:19th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicia
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Original:   Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian  National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:19th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicia
Revised:  Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Indian National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:19th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicia
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Original:   Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian  National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:19th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicia
Revised:  Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian sociologists Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:19th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicia
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Original:   Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian  National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Category:19th-century Indian educators Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Politicians from Kolkata Category:19th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicia
Revised:  Alumni of Trinity College, Cambridge Category: Indian sociologists Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chandra Category:Indian National Congress politicians from West Bengal Category:Indian independence activists from Bengal Category:Prisoners and detainees of British India Mallik, Subodh Chandra Mallik, Subodh Chand
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Original:  The idea for a British mid-ocean ridge research programme was developed by Professors Johnson (‘Joe ’) Cann of Leeds University and Roger Searle of Durham University after they attended a meeting in Oregon in 1987 where the idea for a US mid-ocean ridge research programme (the RIDGE Program) was being developed.
Revised:  The idea for a British mid-ocean ridge research programme was developed by Professors Joe Cann of Leeds University and Roger Searle of Durham University after they attended a meeting in Oregon in 1987 where the idea for a US mid-ocean ridge research programme (the RIDGE Program) was being developed.
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Original:  A separate Science Coordinator role (incorporating, among other duties, responsibility for expanding the BRIDGE Consortium, organising national conferences and publishing the newsletter) was based at Leeds University where the BRIDGE Chief Scientist, Professor Joe Cann, was chairman of Earth Sciences.
Revised:  A separate Science Coordinator role (incorporating, among other duties, responsibility for expanding the BRIDGE Consortium, organising national conferences and publishing the newsletter) was based at Leeds University where the BRIDGE Chief Scientist, Joe Cann, was chairman of Earth Sciences.
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Original:  Dynamics of Processes Associated with Creation of New Ocean Crust (1996), , the 1996 British Association for the Advancement of Science annual science festival at Birmingham in a BRIDGE session entitled Abyssal Inferno: Seafloor volcanoes, hot vents and exotic life at the mid-ocean ridges, at Geoscience 98, Keele University (1998), at the meeting Technology for Deep-Sea Geological Investigations at the Geological Society of London (1998) , and at meetings of the American Geophysical Union.
Revised:  Dynamics of Processes Associated with Creation of New Ocean Crust (1996), the 1996 British Association for the Advancement of Science annual science festival at Birmingham in a BRIDGE session entitled Abyssal Inferno: Seafloor volcanoes, hot vents and exotic life at the mid-ocean ridges, at Geoscience 98, Keele University (1998), at the meeting Technology for Deep-Sea Geological Investigations at the Geological Society of London (1998) , and at meetings of the American Geophysical Union.
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Original:  Dynamics of Processes Associated with Creation of New Ocean Crust (1996), , the 1996 British Association for the Advancement of Science annual science festival at Birmingham in a BRIDGE session entitled Abyssal Inferno: Seafloor volcanoes, hot vents and exotic life at the mid-ocean ridges, at Geoscience 98, Keele University (1998), at the meeting Technology for Deep-Sea Geological Investigations at the Geological Society of London (1998) , and at meetings of the American Geophysical Union.
Revised:  Dynamics of Processes Associated with Creation of New Ocean Crust (1996), , the 1996 British Association for the Advancement of Science annual science festival at Birmingham in a BRIDGE session entitled Abyssal Inferno: Seafloor volcanoes, hot vents and exotic life at the mid-ocean ridges, at Geoscience 98, Keele University (1998), at the meeting Technology for Deep-Sea Geological Investigations at the Geological Society of London (1998) and at meetings of the American Geophysical Union.
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Original:  By issue 10, in April 1996, it had grown to 100 pages and was being distributed to more than 600 researchers and interested parties in 20 countries. . The last newsletter, No. 17, was produced in autumn 1999 as a magazine called The Fiery Deep, Exploring a New Earth summarising the programme and its results to that time.
Revised:  By issue 10, in April 1996, it had grown to 100 pages and was being distributed to more than 600 researchers and interested parties in 20 countries. The last newsletter, No. 17, was produced in autumn 1999 as a magazine called The Fiery Deep, Exploring a New Earth summarising the programme and its results to that time.
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Original:  This permitted the magnetic field of the rock from which the sample was taken to be determined, providing information on sea-bed movements that had taken place after the rock had formed.
Revised:  This permitted the magnetic alignment of the rock from which the sample was taken to be determined, providing information on sea-bed movements that had taken place after the rock had formed.
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Original: Simpson 2014, p. 2551Peter Namicev 1994, pp. 179-184 Since 2008, Masaryk University in Brno, Czech Republic has offered a course in Ethnomuseology titled "MUII165 Practice in museology and ethnography"."
Revised: Simpson 2014, p. 2551Peter Namicev 1994, pp. 179-184 Since 2008, Masaryk University in Brno, Czech Republic has offered a course in ethnomuseology titled "MUII165 Practice in museology and ethnography"."
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Original:  The G8 Research Group runs the G8 Information Centre, which includes an electronic archive of documents related to the summit and its ministerial meetings as well as research and analysis.
Revised:  runs the G8 Information Centre, which includes an electronic archive of documents related to the summit and its ministerial meetings as well as research and analysis.
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Original: The G8 Research Group 's stated mission is to serve as the world’s leading independent source of information, analysis and research on the institutions, issues and members of the Group of Eight and the G8 Summit.
Revised: The G8 Research Group is an independent source of information, analysis and research on the institutions, issues and members of the Group of Eight and the G8 Summit.
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Original: Second rein (1801-1813) After death of his brother Pritiraji , Rayadhan insisted on resuming his authority.
Revised: Second rein (1801-1813) After death of his brother Prithvirajji , Rayadhan insisted on resuming his authority.
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Original:  After Devchand's death the Rao fell into the hands of Sidi Merichthe oppressive governor of Bhuj .
Revised:  Rao appointed Sidi Merich, the governor of Bhuj .
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Original:  Finding himself unable to control them, Sidi Merich chose as minister of the provinces . Vagha Parekh, a Vania by caste , who, greedy and overbearing , attacked the Jadeja chief of Patri and slaying him took his fort.
Revised:  Finding himself unable to control them, Sidi Merich chose as minister of the provinces . Vagha Parekh, a Vania by caste , attacked the Jadeja chief of Patri and slaying him took his fort.
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Original: Rao Rayadhan III was the Rao of Cutch belonging to Jadeja Rajput dynasty, who ascended the throne of Princely State of Cutch in 1778 and ruled until 1786 when he was disposed .
Revised: Rao Rayadhan III was the Rao of Cutch belonging to Jadeja Rajput dynasty, who ascended the throne of Princely State of Cutch in 1778 and ruled until 1786 when he was deposed .
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Original: First rein (1778-1786 ) Rayadhan III succeeded his father Godji II, in 1778, at the early age of fifteen when the state was under disturbance and the revenues were exhausted due to battles.
Revised: First reign (1778–1786 ) Rayadhan III succeeded his father Godji II, in 1778, at the early age of fifteen when the state was under disturbance and the revenues were exhausted due to battles.
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Original:  Under his mother's influence, he appointed Devchand, a Lohana by caste, as his minister who had managed the state under former rein .
Revised:  Under his mother's influence, he appointed Devchand, a Lohana by caste, as his minister who had managed the state under former reign .
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Original:  Second rein (1801-1813 ) After death of his brother Prithvirajji, Rayadhan insisted on resuming his authority.
Revised:  Second reign (1801–1813 ) After death of his brother Prithvirajji, Rayadhan insisted on resuming his authority.
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Original:  Rao appointed Sidi Merich, the governor of Bhuj, as his minister.
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Original:  Mandvi under Ramji Khavas, Anjar under Meghji Seth, and Mundra, Lakhpat, and several other towns under other leaders became indepen independent.
Revised:  Mandvi under Ramji Khavas, Anjar under Meghji Seth, and Mundra, Lakhpat, and several other towns under other leaders became independent.
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Original: Rao Prithvirajji, also known as Bhaiji Bava, was the Rao of Cutch belonging to Jadeja Rajput dynasty, who ascended the throne of Princely State of Cutch as a titular head in 1786 and ruled until 1801 when he was died an early age of twenty seven.
Revised: Rao Prithvirajji, also known as Bhaiji Bava, was the Rao of Cutch belonging to Jadeja Rajput dynasty, who ascended the throne of Princely State of Cutch as a titular head in 1786 and ruled until 1801 when he died at the early age of twenty seven.
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Original:  With his friends he now planned an escape from Bhuj, and on a day when Fateh Muhammad was absent at Lakhpat, the officer in charge of Bhachau sent troops to escort the Rao to Mandvi, where  Hansraj, the commandant of the town, received him, declared in his favour, and drove out the militia that continued true to Fateh Muhammad's interests.
Revised:  With his friends he now planned an escape from Bhuj, and on a day when Fateh Muhammad was absent at Lakhpat, the officer in charge of Bhachau sent troops to escort the Rao to Mandvi, where Seth Hansraj, the commandant of the town, received him, declared in his favour, and drove out the militia that continued true to Fateh Muhammad's interests.
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Original:  The Rao now moved against Bhuj, and being joined by many bands of mercenaries, became so strong that Fateh Muhammad feeling resistance useless, agreed to surrender the capital, if he were given the estates of Anjar and Bhachau.
Revised:  The Rao now moved against Bhuj, and being joined by many bands of mercenaries, became so strong that Fateh Muhammad feeling resistance useless, agreed to surrender the capital, if he were given the estate of Bhachau.
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Original:  Swallowing precautions For those with dysphagia, the patient is placed on aspiration (choking) precautions.
Revised: Some points to remember when feeding a helpless patients are placing the patients in a comfortable position for eating. Oral hygiene is important after eating. Examples of oral hygiene for patients are brushing the teeth, cleaning the dentures and using mouth wash. Allow patients to have sufficient time to swallow food before forcing in another mouthful.Sufficient liquid with the meal can also be provided.Make sure not to leave patient until his appetite is satisfied. Give patients a choice of food. Wash patient's hands and face after feeding. Swallowing precautions For those with dysphagia, the patient is placed on aspiration (choking) precautions.
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Original:  Make sure not to leave the patient until his appetite is satisfied.
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Original:  Life Early life Godji was the son of Rao of Cutch state, Lakhpatji.
Revised:  Early life Godji was the son of Rao of Cutch state, Lakhpatji.
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Original:  Third  invasion About 1775, Miyan Sarfaraz Khan (1772-1777), Ghulam Shah's son, the Kalhora ruler of Hyderabad in Sindh, entering Cutch, took the route of Khavda and Sumrasar, intending to march to Bhuj, but the accounts of its strength frightened him, and leading the army to Chobari and Kanthkot, he married the daughter of the Thakor, and levying fines at Adhoi and other places returned to Sindh.
Revised:  Third Sindh invasion About 1775, Miyan Sarfaraz Khan (1772-1777), Ghulam Shah's son, the Kalhora ruler of Hyderabad in Sindh, entering Cutch, took the route of Khavda and Sumrasar, intending to march to Bhuj, but the accounts of its strength frightened him, and leading the army to Chobari and Kanthkot, he married the daughter of the Thakor, and levying fines at Adhoi and other places returned to Sindh.
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Original:   At this time (1776-1786), in Sind, the struggles between the Kalhoras and Talporas divided the country into two factions.
Revised:  At this time (1776-1786), in Sind, the struggles between the Kalhoras and Talpuras divided the country into two factions.
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Original:  He left two sons, Rayadhan III who succeeded  and Prithvirajji.
Revised:  He left two sons, Rayadhan III who succeeded , and Prithvirajji.
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Original:  He continued as minister a Lohana named Jivan Seth , who had held the post during the last years of his father's reign and refused Punja the post who had hurried from his retirement in Junagadh with expectation of reward of his former help.
Revised:  He continued as minister a Lohana named Jivan Seth , who had held the post during the last years of his father's reign and son of Punja the post who had hurried from his retirement in Junagadh with expectation of reward of his former help.
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Original:  To this Ghulam Shah agreed, and, taking with him Punja's son as a hostage, retired to Sindh.
Revised:  To this Ghulam Shah agreed, retired to Sindh.
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Original:  By his order Punja was seized, confined in irons for ten days, and, by the Rao himself, was presented with a cup of poison.
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Original:  Second Sindh invasion On hearing of Punja's murder , Ghulam Shah gathered another army of 50,000 men, and re-entered Kutch by the Nara route.
Revised:  Second Sindh invasion On hearing of Punja's capture , Ghulam Shah gathered another army of 50,000 men, and re-entered Kutch by the Nara route.
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Original:  Devji was well received by the Rao, aod offered employment.
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Original:  After Punja's death a succession of ministers followed, most of whom were murdered and their property seized by the Rao.
Revised:  After Punja's retierment a succession of ministers followed, most of whom were murdered and their property seized by the Rao.
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Original: John W. Curry has been credited as the first African-American letter carrier in the United States Post Office.
Revised: John W. Curry has been credited as the first African-American letter carrier working for the United States Post Office.
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Original:  He was active in the union, the National Association of Letter Carriers, and his death in 1899 was noted in its magazine, The Postal Record , noting his employment in the Washington, DC post office since 1867.
Revised:  He was active in the National Association of Letter Carriers, and his death in 1899 was noted in its magazine, The Postal Record , noting his employment in the Washington, DC post office since 1867.
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Original:  He was active in the union, the National Association of Letter Carriers, and his death in 1899 was noted in its magazine, The Postal Record , noting his employment in the Washington, DC post office since 1867.
Revised:  He was active in the union, the National Association of Letter Carriers, and his death in 1899 was noted in its magazine, The Postal Record . He was employed in the Washington, DC post office since 1867.
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Original:  He was active in the union, the National Association of Letter Carriers, and his death in 1899 was noted in its magazine, The Postal Record , noting his employment in the Washington, DC post office since 1867.
Revised:  He was active in the union, the National Association of Letter Carriers, and his death in 1899 was noted in its magazine, The Postal Record , noting his employment in the Washington, DC post office in 1867.
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Original:  Lakhpat fort gate Thinking himself ill used, Punja closely allied himself with Godji II, the Rao's only lawful son.
Revised:  Thinking himself ill used, Punja closely allied himself with Godji II, the Rao's only lawful son.
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Original:   Accordingly, in 1738, he raised a disturbance in front of the minister's house, who, coming out to restore order, was attacked and slain by a hired assassin.
Revised:  Though to appearance satisfied, Lakhpatji secretly continued to scheme to bring the government into his hand. His first step was to get rid of the minister Devkarn, whom he hated as the cause of his exclusion from a share of power, and whose close intimacy with his mother he is said to have had strong reason for believing to have been criminal. Accordingly, in 1738, he raised a disturbance in front of the minister's house, who, coming out to restore order, was attacked and slain by a hired assassin.
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Original:  On the accession of the Rao, Seth Devkarn's son PunjPratap was appointed ministerin 1738 , and so long as he was able to find funds he remained in favour.
Revised:  On the accession of the Rao, Devkarn's son PunjPratap was appointed ministerin 1738 , and so long as he was able to find funds he remained in favour.
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Original:  On the accession of the Rao, Seth Devkarn's son PunjPratap was appointed ministerin 1738 , and so long as he was able to find funds he remained in favour.
Revised:  On the accession of the Rao, Seth Devkarn's son Punja was appointed minister , and so long as he was able to find funds he remained in favour.
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Original:   Lakhpat fort gate Meanwhile, Godji was living in Mundra independent of his father.
Revised:  On Gordhan's death Rupshi Sha was freed and restored to power. He continued minister for a year and a half, when, on his return from Kabul, the post was given to Tulshidas, a favourite of the Rao's. Lakhpat fort gate Meanwhile, Godji was living in Mundra independent of his father.
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Original:  300 px | The West Bank250 px | The Gaza Strip There are several plans for a possible Palestinian state.
Revised:  300 px | 250px | The Gaza Strip There are several plans for a possible Palestinian state.
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Original:  However, the position of the Islamic "Hamas is a radical Islamic fundamentalist organization that has stated that its highest priority is a Jihad (holy war) for the liberation of Palestine ..."
Revised:  However, the position of the Islamic* "Hamas is a radical Islamic fundamentalist organization that has stated that its highest priority is a Jihad (holy war) for the liberation of Palestine ..."
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