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Original:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Italy Helicopter Squadron 26 Jamaica Civilian Police 27 Japan Electoral Supervisors 28 Kenya Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Malaysia Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
Revised:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Helicopter Squadron 26 Jamaica Civilian Police 27 Japan Electoral Supervisors 28 Kenya Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Malaysia Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
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Original:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Italy Helicopter Squadron 26 Jamaica Civilian Police 27 Japan Electoral Supervisors 28 Kenya Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Malaysia Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
Revised:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Italy Helicopter Squadron 26 Civilian Police 27 Japan Electoral Supervisors 28 Kenya Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Malaysia Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
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Original:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Italy Helicopter Squadron 26 Jamaica Civilian Police 27 Japan Electoral Supervisors 28 Kenya Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Malaysia Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
Revised:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Italy Helicopter Squadron 26 Jamaica Civilian Police 27 Electoral Supervisors 28 Kenya Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Malaysia Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
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Original:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Italy Helicopter Squadron 26 Jamaica Civilian Police 27 Japan Electoral Supervisors 28 Kenya Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Malaysia Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
Revised:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Italy Helicopter Squadron 26 Jamaica Civilian Police 27 Japan Electoral Supervisors 28 Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Malaysia Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
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Original:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Italy Helicopter Squadron 26 Jamaica Civilian Police 27 Japan Electoral Supervisors 28 Kenya Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Malaysia Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
Revised:  Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 23 Indonesia Civilian Police 24 Ireland Civilian Police, Military Observers 25 Italy Helicopter Squadron 26 Jamaica Civilian Police 27 Japan Electoral Supervisors 28 Kenya Deputy Commander, Infantry Battalion, Military Observers, Electoral Supervisors 29 Royal Malay Regiment Infantry Battalions, Combat Engineers (including Explosive Unit)
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Original:  , Military Observers 30 Netherlands Civilian Police 31 New Zealand 15 Military Engineers,
Revised:  , Military Observers 30 Civilian Police 31 New Zealand 15 Military Engineers,
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Original:  , Military Observers 30 Netherlands Civilian Police 31 New Zealand 15 Military Engineers,
Revised:  , Military Observers 30 Netherlands Civilian Police 31 15 Military Engineers,
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Original:  32 Civilian Police 32 Nigeria Civilian Police,
Revised:  32 Civilian Police 32 Civilian Police,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 33 Norway Civilian Police,
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 33 Civilian Police,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 34 Pakistan 20 Military Observers,
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 34 20 Military Observers,
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Original:  40 Electoral Observers 35 Panama Military Observers 36 Peru Military Observers 37 Poland Logistic Battalion,
Revised:  40 Electoral Observers 35 Military Observers 36 Peru Military Observers 37 Poland Logistic Battalion,
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Original:  40 Electoral Observers 35 Panama Military Observers 36 Peru Military Observers 37 Poland Logistic Battalion,
Revised:  40 Electoral Observers 35 Panama Military Observers 36 Military Observers 37 Poland Logistic Battalion,
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Original:  40 Electoral Observers 35 Panama Military Observers 36 Peru Military Observers 37 Poland Logistic Battalion,
Revised:  40 Electoral Observers 35 Panama Military Observers 36 Peru Military Observers 37 Logistic Battalion,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 38 Portugal Electoral Supervisors 39 Senegal Civilian Police 40 Singapore Civilian Police,
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 38 Electoral Supervisors 39 Senegal Civilian Police 40 Singapore Civilian Police,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 38 Portugal Electoral Supervisors 39 Senegal Civilian Police 40 Singapore Civilian Police,
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 38 Portugal Electoral Supervisors 39 Civilian Police 40 Singapore Civilian Police,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 38 Portugal Electoral Supervisors 39 Senegal Civilian Police 40 Singapore Civilian Police,
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 38 Portugal Electoral Supervisors 39 Senegal Civilian Police 40 Civilian Police,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Spain Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Sudan Military Observers 43 Sweden Civilian Police,
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Sudan Military Observers 43 Sweden Civilian Police,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Spain Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Sudan Military Observers 43 Sweden Civilian Police,
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Spain Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Military Observers 43 Sweden Civilian Police,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Spain Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Sudan Military Observers 43 Sweden Civilian Police,
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Spain Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Sudan Military Observers 43 Civilian Police,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 44 Switzerland Medical Unit,
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 44 Medical Unit,
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Philippines Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 45 Thailand Electoral Supervisors 46 Togo Military Observers 47 Trinidad and Tobago Electoral Supervisors 48 Tunisia Civilian Police 49 Soviet Union Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 United Kingdom Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 United States of America Air transport 52 Yugoslavia Military Observers 53 Algeria Civilian Police 54 Côte d'Ivoire Civilian Police 55 Morocco Military Observers 56 Military Observers
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Original:  Also , in 1966, SWAPO, which had become the preeminent nationalist organization in Namibia in the early 1960s, begin to launch guerrilla attacks from Zambia with its military wing, known as the People's Liberation Army of Namibia (PLAN).
Revised:  Also in 1966, SWAPO, which had become the preeminent nationalist organization in Namibia in the early 1960s, begin to launch guerrilla attacks from Zambia with its military wing, known as the People's Liberation Army of Namibia (PLAN).
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Original:  A series of meetings starting in London and culminating in Geneva , resulting in a ceasefire agreement  set to begin on 8 August 1988.
Revised:  A series of meetings starting in London and culminating in Geneva resulted in a ceasefire agreement set to begin on 8 August 1988.
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Original:  A series of meetings starting in London and culminating in Geneva , resulting in a ceasefire agreement  set to begin on 8 August 1988.
Revised:  A series of meetings starting in London and culminating in Geneva , resulting in a ceasefire agreement , set to begin on 8 August 1988.
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Original:  UNTAG also confirmed  second disarmament of sizable militia, primarily the 22,000 strong South West African Territorial Force and the 11,000 local "citizen forces".
Revised:  UNTAG also confirmed a second disarmament of sizable militia, primarily the 22,000 strong South West African Territorial Force and the 11,000 local "citizen forces".
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Military Observers 43 Civilian Police, Electoral Supervisors 44 Medical Unit, Electoral Supervisors 45 Electoral Supervisors 46 Military Observers 47 Electoral Supervisors 48 Civilian Police 49 Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 Air transport 52 Military Observers 53 Civilian Police 54 Civilian Police 55 Military Observers 56 Military Observers 
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Military Observers 43 Civilian Police, Electoral Supervisors 44 Medical Unit, Electoral Supervisors 45 Electoral Supervisors 46 Military Observers 47 Electoral Supervisors 48 Civilian Police 49 Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 Air transport 52 Military Observers 53 Civilian Police 54 Civilian Police 55 Military Observers 56 Military Observers 57 Military Observers
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Original:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Military Observers 43 Civilian Police, Electoral Supervisors 44 Medical Unit, Electoral Supervisors 45 Electoral Supervisors 46 Military Observers 47 Electoral Supervisors 48 Civilian Police 49 Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 Air transport 52 Military Observers 53 Civilian Police 54 Civilian Police 55 Military Observers 56 Military Observers 57 Military Observers
Revised:  Electoral Supervisors 41 Squadron of Light Transport Aircraft 42 Military Observers 43 Civilian Police, Electoral Supervisors 44 Medical Unit, Electoral Supervisors 45 Electoral Supervisors 46 Military Observers 47 Electoral Supervisors 48 Civilian Police 49 Air transport, Electoral Supervisors 50 Signals Squadron, Electoral Supervisors 51 Air transport 52 Military Observers 53 Civilian Police 54 Civilian Police 55 Military Observers 56 Military Observers 
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Original: The brain's role  Because the brain cannot fully focus when multitasking, people take longer to complete tasks and are predisposed to error.
Revised: The brain's role :) Because the brain cannot fully focus when multitasking, people take longer to complete tasks and are predisposed to error.
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Original: The brain's role :) Because the brain cannot fully focus when multitasking, people take longer to complete tasks and are predisposed to error.
Revised: The brain's role Because the brain cannot fully focus when multitasking, people take longer to complete tasks and are predisposed to error.
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Original:  If one becomes proficient at two tasks  it is possible to rapidly shift attention between the tasks and perform the tasks well.
Revised:  If one becomes proficient at two tasks , it is possible to rapidly shift attention between the tasks and perform the tasks well.
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Original: Laptop and mobile phone Human multitasking is the ability to perform more than one task or activity at the same time, such as speaking on the phone while driving a car.
Revised: Laptop and mobile phone Human multitasking is the concept that one can split their attention on more than one task or activity at the same time, such as speaking on the phone while driving a car.
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Original:  The canals’ lines turn at perfect right angles over smooth rock.
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Original:  Built around 1500 B.C.E, it comprises aqueducts, a grotto and petroglyphs  . Date The canals at Cumbe Mayo are thought to be at least 3,000 years old.
Revised:  Built around 1500 B.C.E, it comprises aqueducts, a grotto and petroglyphs . History The aqueduct and the petroglyphs at Cumbemayo are thought to be at least 3,000 years old.
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