wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  That amount was given to both of the two lottery ticket winners of the draw, both of which happened to live in the United Kingdom   .
Revised:  That amount was given to both of the two lottery ticket winners of the draw, both of which happened to live in the United Kingdom . .
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Original:  The group were able to carry out purchases using a card, even without knowing the associated personal identification number (PIN), by using a  man-in-the middle attack           
Revised:  The group were able to carry out purchases using a card, even without knowing the associated personal identification number (PIN), by using a " man-in-the middle attack 
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Original:  The group were able to carry out purchases using a card, even without knowing the associated personal identification number (PIN), by using a  man-in-the middle attack           
Revised:  The group were able to carry out purchases using a card, even without knowing the associated personal identification number (PIN), by using a man-in-the middle " attack. 
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Original:  University of Cambridge security expert Professor Ross Anderson has blasted the chip and PIN system used for credit and debit card transactions  in the UK  , after his research team discovered a major flaw .
Revised:  University of Cambridge security expert Professor Ross Anderson has blasted the chip and PIN system used for credit and debit card transactions in the UK , after his research team discovered a serious vulnerability .
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Original:  Chip and PIN terminals require the cardholder to  enter their secret PIN before a transaction can be authorised.
Revised:  Retail terminals at the point of sale require the cardholder to enter their secret PIN before a transaction can be authorised.
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Original:  Chip and PIN terminals require the cardholder to  enter their secret PIN before a transaction can be authorised.
Revised:  Chip and PIN terminals require the cardholder to insert their card and enter their secret PIN before a transaction can be authorised.
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Original:  "In practice how this attack would work is that one reasonably technically skilled person would build a device that carries out the attack and then sell this equipment on the internet just like criminals already do," said Dr Steven Murdoch , who worked on the project.
Revised:  "In practice how this attack would work is that one reasonably technically skilled person would build a device that carries out the attack and then sell this equipment on the internet just like criminals already do," said Dr Steven Murdoch who worked on the project.
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Original:  "However, we strongly refute the allegation that chip and PIN is broken.  
Revised:  "However, we strongly refute the allegation that chip and PIN is broken. " 
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Original:  The attack in Musayyib was the deadliest suicide attack since 125 people were killed in February in Hilla, also south of Baghdad In Baghdad, the government was blamed by politiciansduring a parliamentary session for the dire security situation.
Revised:  The attack in Musayyib was the deadliest suicide attack since 125 people were killed in February in Hilla, also south of Baghdad During a parliamentary session in Baghdad, the government was blamed by politiciansduring a parliamentary session for the dire security situation.
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Original:  The attack in Musayyib was the deadliest suicide attack since 125 people were killed in February in Hilla, also south of Baghdad In Baghdad, the government was blamed by politiciansduring a parliamentary session for the dire security situation.
Revised:  The attack in Musayyib was the deadliest suicide attack since 125 people were killed in February in Hilla, also south of Baghdad In Baghdad, the government was blamed by politicians for the dire security situation.
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Original:  Calls were made for local militia to be formed to replace the police and soldiers who had failed to protect Iraqis
Revised:  Calls were made for local militia to be formed to replace the police and soldiers who had failed to protect Iraqi
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Original: ]] Former US President, Bill Clinton, was released from New York Presbyterian Hospital on Friday following his undergoing an hour-long operation to insert two stents into one of his coronary arteries the day before.
Revised: ]] Former US President, Bill Clinton, left New York Presbyterian Hospital on Friday following his undergoing an hour-long operation to insert two stents into one of his coronary arteries the day before.
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Original: ]] Former US President , Bill Clinton , left New York Presbyterian Hospital on Friday following his undergoing an hour-long operation to insert two stents into one of his coronary arteries the day before . Clinton has had previous heart troubles in the past.
Revised: ]] Former US President Bill Clinton left New York Presbyterian Hospital on Friday following his undergoing an hour-long operation to insert two stents into one of his coronary arteries the day before . Clinton has had previous heart troubles in the past.
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Original: ]] Former US President , Bill Clinton , left New York Presbyterian Hospital on Friday following his undergoing an hour-long operation to insert two stents into one of his coronary arteries the day before . Clinton has had previous heart troubles in the past.
Revised: ]] Former US President , Bill Clinton , left New York Presbyterian Hospital on Friday after undergoing an hour-long operation to insert two stents into one of his coronary arteries the day before . Clinton has had previous heart troubles in the past.
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Original: ]] Former US President , Bill Clinton , left New York Presbyterian Hospital on Friday following his undergoing an hour-long operation to insert two stents into one of his coronary arteries the day before . Clinton has had previous heart troubles in the past.
Revised: ]] Former US President , Bill Clinton , left New York Presbyterian Hospital on Friday following his undergoing an hour-long operation to insert two stents into one of his coronary arteries the previous day . Clinton has had previous heart troubles in the past.
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Original:  Clinton has had previous heart troubles in the past .
Revised:  Clinton has had previous heart troubles .
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Original: Chelsea  had a bid of £20,000,000 for the England winger rejected on Friday after they finally made their interest in the player official.
Revised: Chelsea FC had a bid of £20,000,000 for the England winger rejected on Friday after they finally made their interest in the player official.
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Original: Yesterday, the Obama administration has ordered an investigation into the appropriateness of military hardware being sold to and deployed by police forces in the United States.
Revised: Yesterday, the 's administration has ordered an investigation into the appropriateness of military hardware being sold to and deployed by police forces in the United States.
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Original:  This investigation comes after the killing of Michael Brown, an unarmed black teenager shot by police in  on August 9.
Revised:  This investigation comes after the killing of Michael Brown, an unarmed black teenager shot by police in , on August 9.
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Original:  A spokesman for the administration said that Obama "has directed a review of federal programs and funding that enable state and local law enforcement to purchase military equipment".
Revised:  A spokesman for the administration said Obama "has directed a review of federal programs and funding that enable state and local law enforcement to purchase military equipment".
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Original:  Senator (D-MO) announced earlier last week that the Senate's Financial & Contracting Oversight Subcommittee will have a hearing in September on demilitarization of police forces.
Revised:  , of , announced earlier last week that the Senate's Financial & Contracting Oversight Subcommittee will have a hearing in September on demilitarization of police forces.
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Original:  Senator (D-MO) announced earlier last week that the Senate's Financial & Contracting Oversight Subcommittee will have a hearing in September on demilitarization of police forces.
Revised:  Senator (D-MO) announced earlier last week the Senate's Financial & Contracting Oversight Subcommittee will have a hearing in September on demilitarization of police forces.
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Original:  Senator (R-KY) wrote an op-ed for Time arguing that militarization of the police needed to be ended: "There is a legitimate role for the police to keep the peace, but there should be a difference between a police response and a military response.
Revised:  Senator (R-KY) wrote an op-ed for Time arguing militarization of the police needed to be ended: "There is a legitimate role for the police to keep the peace, but there should be a difference between a police response and a military response.
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Original:  The images and scenes we continue to see in Ferguson resemble war more than traditional police action." Paul also argued that race played a part in the provision of justice in the United States: "Anyone who thinks that race does not still, even if inadvertently, skew the application of criminal justice in this country is just not paying close enough attention.
Revised:  The images and scenes we continue to see in Ferguson resemble war more than traditional police action." Paul also argued race played a part in the provision of justice in the United States: "Anyone who thinks that race does not still, even if inadvertently, skew the application of criminal justice in this country is just not paying close enough attention.
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Original:  The review will consider issues around training and federal oversight.
Revised:  The review is to consider issues around training and federal oversight.
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Original:   That would be contrary to our traditions."
Revised:  ... That would be contrary to our traditions."
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Original: Yesterday, the 's administration  has ordered an investigation into the appropriateness of military hardware being sold to and deployed by police forces in the United States.
Revised: Yesterday, the 's administration said it has ordered an investigation into the appropriateness of military hardware being sold to and deployed by police forces in the United States.
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Original: , of , announced earlier last week the Senate's Financial Contracting Oversight Subcommittee will have a hearing in September on demilitarization of police forces.
Revised: , of , announced earlier last week the Contracting Oversight Subcommittee will have a hearing in September on demilitarization of police forces.
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Original: , of , announced earlier last week the Senate's Financial Contracting Oversight Subcommittee will have a hearing in September on demilitarization of police forces.
Revised: , of , announced earlier last week the Senate's Financial 's will have a hearing in September on demilitarization of police forces.
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Original:  McCaskill said of the events in Ferguson: "We need to demilitarize this situation — this kind of response by the police has become the problem instead of the solution . " 
Revised:  McCaskill said of the events in Ferguson: "We need to demilitarize this situation — this kind of response by the police has become the problem instead of the solution " 
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Original:  McCaskill said of the events in Ferguson: "We need to demilitarize this situation — this kind of response by the police has become the problem instead of the solution . " 
Revised:  McCaskill said of the events in Ferguson: "We need to demilitarize this situation — this kind of response by the police has become the problem instead of the solution . " .
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Original:  This is the first ever schedualed long haul route from Ireland not to North America.
Revised:  This is the first ever scheduled long haul route from Ireland not to North America.
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Original: Gulf Air is hopeing travellers will use the service as a gateway to Asia, Africa and Oceania.
Revised: Gulf Air is hoping travellers will use the service as a gateway to Asia, Africa and Oceania.
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Original: Middle Eastern carrier Gulf Air has announced it is to provide direct flights from Dublin, Ireland to its hub in Manama, Bahrain from December three times a week.
Revised: Middle Eastern carrier has announced it is to provide direct flights from Dublin, Ireland to its hub in Manama, Bahrain from December three times a week.
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Original:  There were three occupants in the Vauxhall Vectra, including Gabrielle, her six-year-old brother Ryan and 41-year-old Chris Grady, who was driving the vehicle   
Revised:  There were three occupants in the Vauxhall Vectra, including Gabrielle, her six-year-old brother Ryan and 41-year-old Chris Grady, who was driving the vehicle . 
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Original: Gabrielle was involved in a vehicle crash on Thursday which involved the car she was in crashing into the River Avon in the town of Evesham in Worcestershire, England.
Revised: Gabrielle was involved in a vehicle crash on Thursday when the car she was in crashing into the River Avon in the town of Evesham in Worcestershire, England.
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Original: Gabrielle was involved in a vehicle crash on Thursday which involved the car she was in crashing into the River Avon in the town of Evesham in Worcestershire, England.
Revised: Gabrielle was involved in a vehicle crash on Thursday which involved the car she was in crashed into the River Avon in the town of Evesham in Worcestershire, England.
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Original:  It took 12 minutes for divers to take to free Gabrielle from the car, which was partially underwater.
Revised:  It took 12 minutes for divers to free Gabrielle from the car, which was partially underwater.
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Original:  "No one survived -- the plane was destroyed," said Alfonso Nsue Mokuy, the Information minister of E Guinea, after rescue teams arrived at the crash site on sunday   
Revised:  "No one survived -- the plane was destroyed," said Alfonso Nsue Mokuy, the Information minister of E Guinea, after rescue teams arrived at the crash site on sunday . 
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Original:  "No one survived -- the plane was destroyed," said Alfonso Nsue Mokuy, the Information minister of E Guinea, after rescue teams arrived at the crash site on sunday   
Revised:  "No one survived -- the plane was destroyed," said Alfonso Nsue Mokuy, the Information minister of E Guinea, after rescue teams arrived at the crash site on sunday Flying in Africa is considerably more dangerous than is other parts of the world. While accounting for only 3 \% of worldwide air traffic, 27 \% of all fatal airplane crashes occour in Africa according to Dutch-based Aviation Safety Network. This is blamed on the chronic under-investment many airline company on the continent suffer from
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Original:  Witnesses told AFP the old Antonov aircraft bound for Bata suddenly catched fire and crashed in a forest near Baney, a town some 19km from the capital.
Revised:  Witnesses told AFP the Antonov aircraft bound for Bata suddenly catched fire and crashed in a forest near Baney, a town some 19km from the capital.
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Original:  "No one survived -- the plane was destroyed," said Alfonso Nsue Mokuy, the Information minister of E Guinea, after rescue teams arrived at the crash site on sunday .
Revised:  "No one survived -- the plane was destroyed," said Alfonso Nsue Mokuy, the Information minister of E Guinea, after rescue teams arrived at the crash site on Sunday .
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Original:  The old propeller-machine took off at about 10am local time (9am UTC) and disappeard from the radar soon after, officals said.
Revised:  The old propeller-machine took off at about 10am local time (9am UTC) and disappeard from the radar soon after, officials said.
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Original:  This is blamed on the chronic under-investment many airline company on the continent suffer from
Revised:  This is blamed on the chronic under-investment many airline companies on the continent suffer from
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Original: Laraque has been a long time vegan and animal rights activist.
Revised: Laraque has been a long time vegan , meaning he eats no meat or other products derived from animals, like milk and cheese, and animal rights activist.
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Original: 200px| File photo of Georges Laraque  Former Montreal Canadiens hockey player Georges Laraque joined the Green Party of Canada, according to The Canadian Press and the Green Party of Canada.
Revised: 200px| Photo of Georges Laraque Former Montreal Canadiens hockey player Georges Laraque joined the Green Party of Canada, according to The Canadian Press and the Green Party of Canada.
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Original:  Laraque has been a long time vegan, meaning he eats no meat or other products derived from animals, like milk and cheese, and animal rights activist.
Revised: “The Green Party has been active in Parliament in Europe and Australia for many years, and it has been to their benefit. It is high time for Canada to build a strong Green Party and to elect MPs who will speak out for a modern, sustainable and just vision of our development and choices,” said Jacques Rivard, Deputy Leader of the Green Party of Canada. Laraque has been a long time vegan, meaning he eats no meat or other products derived from animals, like milk and cheese, and animal rights activist.
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Original:  Former Montreal Canadiens hockey player Georges Laraque  joined the Green Party of Canada, according to  The Canadian Press and the Green Party of Canada .
Revised:  Former Montreal Canadiens hockey player Georges Laraque has joined the Green Party of Canada, according to The Canadian Press and the Green Party of Canada .
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Original:  Former Montreal Canadiens hockey player Georges Laraque  joined the Green Party of Canada, according to  The Canadian Press and the Green Party of Canada .
Revised:  Former Montreal Canadiens hockey player Georges Laraque joined the Green Party of Canada, according to The Canadian Press .
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Original:  Laraque has been a long time vegan, meaning he eats no meat or other products derived from animals, like milk and cheese , and animal rights activist.
Revised:  Laraque has been a long time vegan, meaning he eats no meat or other products derived from animals, like milk and cheese ; and an animal rights activist.
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Original:  He was released by the Habs last month after scoring only one goal
Revised:  He was released by the Canadiens, popularly known as the Habs, after scoring only one goal
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Original: Tiger Woods has won the British Open  at St Andrews for the second time.
Revised: Tiger Woods has won the British Open Championship at St Andrews for the second time.
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Original:  Woods had held the lead at the Old Course since the first day of the Open , with opening rounds of 66-67.
Revised:  Woods had held the lead at the Old Course since the first day of the championship , with opening rounds of 66-67.
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Original:    The accused 13 year old student , found near the school with a minor self-inflicted neck wound , is assisting police with their enquiries .
Revised:  The accused 13 year old student was found near the school with a minor self-inflicted neck wound , is assisting police with their enquiries .
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Original:    The accused 13 year old student , found near the school with a minor self-inflicted neck wound , is assisting police with their enquiries .
Revised:  The accused 13 year old student , found near the school with a minor self-inflicted neck wound .
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Original: QUEENSLAND - A 12 year old pupil at a private all boy's school on Brisbane's northside has died in the Royal Children's Hospital this morning after being stabbed  with a knife in the chest by another 13 year old student.
Revised: A twelve-year-old pupil at a private all boy's school on Brisbane's northside has died in the Royal Children's Hospital this morning after being stabbed with a knife in the chest by another 13 year old student.
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Original: QUEENSLAND - A 12 year old pupil at a private all boy's school on Brisbane's northside has died in the Royal Children's Hospital this morning after being stabbed  with a knife in the chest by another 13 year old student.
Revised: QUEENSLAND - A 12 year old pupil at a private all boy's school on Brisbane's north side has died in the Royal Children's Hospital this morning after being stabbed with a knife in the chest by another 13 year old student.
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Original: QUEENSLAND - A 12 year old pupil at a private all boy's school on Brisbane's northside has died in the Royal Children's Hospital this morning after being stabbed  with a knife in the chest by another 13 year old student.
Revised: QUEENSLAND - A 12 year old pupil at a private all boy's school on Brisbane's northside has died in the Royal Children's Hospital this morning after being stabbed with a knife in the chest by a thirteen-year-old fellow student.
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Original:  St Patrick's College, a Catholic school with around 1100 studentsand run by The Christian Brothers in the bayside suburb of Shorncliffe,  went into lockdown at around 8.15am AEST for 3 hours, and has since assured parents their sons are safe to remain at the school until the usual time.
Revised:  St Patrick's College, a Catholic school with around 1100 studentsand run by The Christian Brothers in the bayside suburb of Shorncliffe, went into lockdown at around 8.15am AEST for three hours; they have since assured parents their sons are safe to remain at the school until the usual time.
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Original:  In a prepared statement the school headmaster, Dr Michael Carroll said "I have informed students and staff of this tragedy and counselling services are available to all students and staff.
Revised:  In a prepared statement the school headmaster, Dr Michael Carroll , said, "I have informed students and staff of this tragedy and counselling services are available to all students and staff.
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Original:  The accused 13 year old student was found near the school with a minor self-inflicted neck wound.
Revised:  The accused student was found near the school with a minor self-inflicted neck wound.
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Original: Two packed commuter trains have crashed head-on outside Brussels, Belgium, killing as many as 25 people and injuring many others.
Revised: Two packed commuter trains have crashed head-on 
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Original:  The trains collided in snowy conditions Monday morning just outside a train station in Buizingen , located in Halle, Belgium, about 15 kilometers southwest of the Belgian capital.
Revised:  The trains collided in snowy conditions at 08:28 local time (0728 UTC) near the station of Buizingen in the municipality of Halle, about 15 kilometers southwest of the Belgian capital.
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Original:  The trains collided in snowy conditions Monday morning just outside a train station in Buizingen , located in Halle, Belgium, about 15 kilometers southwest of the Belgian capital.
Revised:  The trains collided in snowy conditions Monday morning just outside a train station in Buizingen , located in Halle, Belgium, about 15 kilometres southwest of the Belgian capital.
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Original:  The collision saw the first two carriages of one train being forced upwards into the air over the first carriage of the second train.
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Original:  Images from the crash scene show that the front cars from the two trains are completly destroyed.
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