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Original:  China blocks countless websites such as Falun Gong, a spiritual movement banned in China.
Revised:  China blocks countless websites , from ones featuring porn to those devoted to Falun Gong, a spiritual movement banned in China.
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Original:  Anything on democracy and human rights is apparently off-limits  .
Revised:  Anything on human rights is apparently off-limits .
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Original:  Anything on democracy and human rights is apparently off-limits  .
Revised:  Anything on democracy and human rights is off-limits .
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Original:  Although the precise material filtered out by the Chinese government is dynamic and more specific than this implies, any censorship of the internet is seen by some free-speach advocates a gross violation of human rights.
Revised:  Although the precise material filtered out by the Chinese government is dynamic and more specific than this implies, any censorship of the internet is seen by some free-speech advocates a gross violation of human rights.
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Original:  According to Andrew Chung of the Toronto Star , "China blocks countless websites, from ones featuring porn to those devoted to Falun Gong, a spiritual movement banned in China.
Revised:  According to Andrew Chung of the , "China blocks countless websites, from ones featuring porn to those devoted to Falun Gong, a spiritual movement banned in China.
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Original:  Although the precise material filtered out by the Chinese government is dynamic and more specific than this implies, any censorship of the internet is seen by some free-speech advocates a gross violation of human rights.
Revised:  Although the precise out by the Chinese government is dynamic and more specific than this implies, any censorship of the internet is seen by some free-speech advocates a gross violation of human rights.
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Original:  The driver was apprehended and arrested at the Dualway depot  
Revised:  The driver was apprehended and arrested at the Dualway depot . 
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Original: The coach was stolen from the yard of private hire operator Dualway by a driver who was not authorised to take the vehicle early in the morning of May 7, apparently after an argument with the owner of the firm.
Revised: The coach was stolen from the yard of private hire operator Dualway by a driver who was not authorised to take the vehicle early in the morning of May 7.
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Original:  The Gardaí fired several shots at the driver's tyres in an attempt to stop the car, as well as laying tacks.
Revised:  The Gardaí fired several shots at the driver's tires in an attempt to stop the car, as well as laying tacks.
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Original: Michael Schumacher takes away another first place from Fernando Alonso This weekend a fifth in this season Formula-1 Gran Prix of Europe took place in Germany, Nürburgring track.
Revised:  This weekend a fifth in this season Formula-1 Gran Prix of Europe took place in Germany, Nürburgring track.
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Original: This weekend a fifth in this seasonFormula-1 Gran Prix of Europe  took place in Germany , Nürburgring track.
Revised: This weekend the fifth Grand Prix weekend of the Formula 1 season, the Grand Prix of Europe took place in Germany , Nürburgring track.
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Original: This weekend a fifth in this seasonFormula-1 Gran Prix of Europe  took place in Germany , Nürburgring track.
Revised: This weekend a fifth in this seasonFormula-1 Gran Prix of Europe , took place in Germany , Nürburgring track.
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Original: This weekend a fifth in this seasonFormula-1 Gran Prix of Europe  took place in Germany , Nürburgring track.
Revised: This weekend a fifth in this seasonFormula-1 Gran Prix of Europe took place in Germany on the Nürburgring track.
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Original:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher was only second after the classification on Saturday, losing the pole-position to Fernando Alonso,  first Renault pilot.
Revised:  Unlike the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher was only second after the classification on Saturday, losing the pole-position to Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot.
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Original:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher was only second after the classification on Saturday, losing the pole-position to Fernando Alonso,  first Renault pilot.
Revised:  Unlike in the previous race, Michael Schumacher was only second after the classification on Saturday, losing the pole-position to Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot.
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Original:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher was only second after the classification on Saturday, losing the pole-position to Fernando Alonso,  first Renault pilot.
Revised:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher was only second on the grid after qualifying on Saturday, losing the pole-position to Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot.
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Original:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher was only second after the classification on Saturday, losing the pole-position to Fernando Alonso,  first Renault pilot.
Revised:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher was only second after the classification on Saturday, losing out the pole position to Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot.
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Original:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher was only second after the classification on Saturday, losing the pole-position to Fernando Alonso,  first Renault pilot.
Revised:  Unlike in the previous race, this time, Michael Schumacher was only second after the classification on Saturday, losing the pole-position to Fernando Alonso, the first Renault pilot.
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Original:  However, in the last part of the race, "Schumi" outstayed Alonso on the track and have the lead owing to some fast laps with the track free of traffic .
Revised:  However, in the last part of the race, "Schumi" outpaced Alonso on the track and have the lead owing to some fast laps with the track free of traffic .
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Original:  However, in the last part of the race, "Schumi" outstayed Alonso on the track and have the lead owing to some fast laps with the track free of traffic .
Revised:  However, in the last part of the race, "Schumi" outstayed Alonso on the track and took the lead thanks to some fast laps with the track free of traffic .
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Original:  The "Red Baron" passed the checked flag and won the race 86-th time in his Formula-1 career.
Revised:  The "Red Baron" passed the checked flag and won for the 86th time in his Formula-1 career.
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Original:  The "Red Baron" passed the checked flag and won the race 86-th time in his Formula-1 career.
Revised:  The "Red Baron" passed the checked flag and won the race 86-th time in his Formula 1 career.
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Original:  In spite of the second defeat , Fernando Alonso stands in the lead of the drivers championship, 13 points ahead his closest competitor, Michael Schumacher.
Revised:  In spite of his second "defeat" , Fernando Alonso stands in the lead of the drivers championship, 13 points ahead his closest competitor, Michael Schumacher.
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Original:  This achievement is the first victory in his Formula-1 career.
Revised:  This achievement is the first victory in his Formula 1 career.
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Original:  Kimi pushs Massa pretty well on the last laps and closed the gap to a +0.4 seconds when they crossed the finish line.
Revised:  Kimi pushs Massa pretty well on the last laps and closed the gap to Felipe Massa to +0.4 seconds when they crossed the finish line.
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Original:  Kimi pushs Massa pretty well on the last laps and closed the gap to a +0.4 seconds when they crossed the finish line.
Revised:  Kimi pushs Massa pretty well on the last laps and closed the gap to a +0.4 seconds upon crossing the finish line.
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Original:  Nico Rosberg, the "discovery of the season", made a nice race for BMW Sauber Formula-1 stable .
Revised:  Nico Rosberg, the "discovery of the season", had a nice race for BMW Sauber Formula-1 stable .
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Original:  Nico Rosberg, the "discovery of the season", made a nice race for BMW Sauber Formula-1 stable .
Revised:  Nico Rosberg, the "discovery of the season", made a nice race for the Williams Formula 1 team .
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Original:  He finished 7-th
Revised:  He finished 7th
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Original: A report by the Ministry of Defence investigating the possible existence of w: Unidentified Flying Objects (UFOs) was released today.
Revised: A report by the Ministry of Defence investigating the possible existence of Unidentified Flying Objects (UFOs) was released today.
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Original:  The report was confidentially published in 2000 and has come to light after Dr David Clarke of Sheffield Hallam University requested it citing the w: Freedom of Information Act.
Revised:  The report was confidentially published in 2000 and has come to light after Dr David Clarke of Sheffield Hallam University requested it citing the Freedom of Information Act.
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Original:  Explanations such as w: meteors and the aurora borealis effect are accredited as the cause of most if not all UFO sightings.
Revised:  Explanations such as meteors and the aurora borealis effect are accredited as the cause of most if not all UFO sightings.
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Original:  Last week’s announcement that most soda manufacturers will stop selling their products in U.S. schools made no mention that avoiding the possibility of future lawsuits to block what they voluntarily stopped was part of the motivation for the self-imposed ban.
Revised: 420px Last week’s announcement that most soda manufacturers will stop selling their products in U.S. schools made no mention that avoiding the possibility of future lawsuits to block what they voluntarily stopped was part of the motivation for the self-imposed ban.
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Original:  Some of those who threatened legal action to block sales of sugary sodas in schools pat themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
Revised:  Some of those who threatened legal action to block sales of sugary sodas in schools are patting themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
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Original: 420px Last week’s announcement that most soda manufacturers will stop selling their products in U.S. schools made no mention that avoiding the possibility of future lawsuits to block what they voluntarily stopped was part of the motivation for the self-imposed ban.
Revised: 420px In an announcement made last week, soda manufacturers agreed to stop the sale of their products in U.S. schools made no mention that avoiding the possibility of future lawsuits to block what they voluntarily stopped was part of the motivation for the self-imposed ban.
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Original:  Some of those who threatened legal action  to block sales of  sugary sodas in schools are patting themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
Revised:  Some of those who threatened legal action to block sales of the sugary sodas in schools are patting themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
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Original:  Some of those who threatened legal action  to block sales of  sugary sodas in schools are patting themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
Revised:  Some of those who threatened legal action to block sales of sugary sodas in schools , pat themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
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Original:  their bottlers and the public health advocacy group, the Alliance for a Healthier Generation , on the agreement , Michael F. Jacobson, executive director of the Center for Science in the Public Interest thanked his team of litigators for “negotiating effectively with the soft-drink industry over the past six months and for demonstrating that the judicial system can play an important role in spurring public health advances.”
Revised:  their bottlers and the public health advocacy group, the Alliance for a Healthier Generation , Michael F. Jacobson, executive director of the Center for Science in the Public Interest thanked his team of litigators for “negotiating effectively with the soft-drink industry over the past six months and for demonstrating that the judicial system can play an important role in spurring public health advances.”
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Original:  Students at James Logan High School pass a Coke truck delivering soft drinks as they arrive on campus May 8.
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Original: In the wake of the announcement of the agreement by the three largest soft drink companies, their bottlers and the public health advocacy group, the Alliance for a Healthier Generation, Michael F. Jacobson, executive director of the Center for Science in the Public Interest thanked his team of litigators for “ negotiating effectively with the soft-drink industry over the past six months and for demonstrating that the judicial system can play an important role in spurring public health advances.”
Revised:  “ negotiating effectively with the soft-drink industry over the past six months and for demonstrating that the judicial system can play an important role in spurring public health advances.”
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Original: In the wake of the announcement of the agreement by the three largest soft drink companies, their bottlers and the public health advocacy group, the Alliance for a Healthier Generation, Michael F. Jacobson, executive director of the Center for Science in the Public Interest thanked his team of litigators for “ negotiating effectively with the soft-drink industry over the past six months and for demonstrating that the judicial system can play an important role in spurring public health advances.”
Revised: In the wake of the announcement of the agreement by the three largest soft drink companies, their bottlers and the public health advocacy group, the Alliance for a Healthier Generation, Michael F. Jacobson, executive director of the Center for Science in the Public Interest thanked his team of litigators for “ 
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Original:  “ Though there is room for improvement -sugary “sports” drinks still will be sold in schools, for instance - this voluntary agreement is certainly good enough that CSPI will drop its planned lawsuit against Coca-Cola, PepsiCo, Cadbury-Schweppes and their bottlers,” Jacobson said in a press release.
Revised:  Though there is room for improvement -sugary “sports” drinks still will be sold in schools, for instance - this voluntary agreement is certainly good enough that CSPI will drop its planned lawsuit against Coca-Cola, PepsiCo, Cadbury-Schweppes and their bottlers,” Jacobson said in a press release.
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Original:  “ Though there is room for improvement -sugary “sports” drinks still will be sold in schools, for instance - this voluntary agreement is certainly good enough that CSPI will drop its planned lawsuit against Coca-Cola, PepsiCo, Cadbury-Schweppes and their bottlers,” Jacobson said in a press release.
Revised:  “ Though there is room for improvement — sugary “sports” drinks still will be sold in schools, for instance - this voluntary agreement is certainly good enough that CSPI will drop its planned lawsuit against Coca-Cola, PepsiCo, Cadbury-Schweppes and their bottlers,” Jacobson said in a press release.
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Original:  “ Though there is room for improvement -sugary “sports” drinks still will be sold in schools, for instance - this voluntary agreement is certainly good enough that CSPI will drop its planned lawsuit against Coca-Cola, PepsiCo, Cadbury-Schweppes and their bottlers,” Jacobson said in a press release.
Revised:  “ Though there is room for improvement -sugary “sports” drinks still will be sold in schools, for instance — this voluntary agreement is certainly good enough that CSPI will drop its planned lawsuit against Coca-Cola, PepsiCo, Cadbury-Schweppes and their bottlers,” Jacobson said in a press release.
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Original:  That would enable USDA to eliminate the sale of candy, cookies, French fries, potato chips, and other snack foods, as well as sports drinks, that are standard fare in school vending machines and stores   .”
Revised:  That would enable USDA to eliminate the sale of candy, cookies, French fries, potato chips, and other snack foods, as well as sports drinks, that are standard fare in school vending machines and stores .” .”
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Original: “Though there is room for improvement — sugary “sports” drinks still will be sold in schools, for instance — this voluntary agreement is certainly good enough that CSPI will drop its planned lawsuit against Coca-Cola, PepsiCo, Cadbury-Schweppes and their bottlers,” Jacobson said in a press release . “I hope this settlement contributes to the momentum that is building in Congress for legislation that would require USDA to update its standards for foods sold outside of school meals.
Revised: “Though there is room for improvement — sugary “sports” drinks still will be sold in schools, for instance — this voluntary agreement is certainly good enough that CSPI will drop its planned lawsuit against Coca-Cola, PepsiCo, Cadbury-Schweppes and their bottlers,” said Michael F. Jacobson, the executive director of the Center for Science in the Public Interest . “I hope this settlement contributes to the momentum that is building in Congress for legislation that would require USDA to update its standards for foods sold outside of school meals.
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Original:  their bottlers and the public health advocacy group, the Alliance for a Healthier Generation, Michael F. Jacobson , executive director of the Center for Science in the Public Interest thanked his team of litigators for “negotiating effectively with the soft-drink industry over the past six months  and for demonstrating that the judicial system can play an important role in spurring public health advances.”
Revised:  their bottlers and the public health advocacy group, the Alliance for a Healthier Generation, Jacobson thanked his team of litigators for “negotiating effectively with the soft-drink industry over the past six months and for demonstrating that the judicial system can play an important role in spurring public health advances.”
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Original:  their bottlers and the public health advocacy group, the Alliance for a Healthier Generation, Michael F. Jacobson , executive director of the Center for Science in the Public Interest thanked his team of litigators for “negotiating effectively with the soft-drink industry over the past six months  and for demonstrating that the judicial system can play an important role in spurring public health advances.”
Revised:  their bottlers and the public health advocacy group, the Alliance for a Healthier Generation, Michael F. Jacobson , executive director of the Center for Science in the Public Interest thanked his team of litigators for “negotiating effectively with the soft-drink industry over the past six months , and for demonstrating that the judicial system can play an important role in spurring public health advances.”
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Original:  In an announcement made last week, soda manufacturers agreed to stop the sale of their products in U.S. schools . Some who threatened legal action against soda makers in an effort to block sales of the sugary sodas in schools, pat themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
Revised:  Last week’s announcement that most soda manufacturers will stop selling their sugary products in U.S. schools . Some who threatened legal action against soda makers in an effort to block sales of the sugary sodas in schools, pat themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
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Original:  In an announcement made last week, soda manufacturers agreed to stop the sale of their products in U.S. schools . Some who threatened legal action against soda makers in an effort to block sales of the sugary sodas in schools, pat themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
Revised:  In an announcement made last week, soda manufacturers agreed to stop the sale of their products in U.S. schools . Some who threatened legal action to stop the soda sales are patting themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
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Original:  In an announcement made last week, soda manufacturers agreed to stop the sale of their products in U.S. schools . Some who threatened legal action against soda makers in an effort to block sales of the sugary sodas in schools, pat themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and are now laying plans to press for more restrictions.
Revised:  In an announcement made last week, soda manufacturers agreed to stop the sale of their products in U.S. schools . Some who threatened legal action against soda makers in an effort to block sales of the sugary sodas in schools, pat themselves on the back over the agreement, while lamenting that the deal did not go far enough, and now plan to press for more restrictions.
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Revised:  A group of protesters have now gathered outside Mr Ferguson's new home in Ipswich, who at one stage threw rocks at the house. The Mayor has defended the actions of the protesters saying "All the residents are doing is showing their democratic right - what they feel - and I think that in this country, they have a right to do that," he said. References
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Revised:  "I think the only thing left is institutionalise. I think that's the only thing left in this community because you just can't keep shifting the problem all over the state and all over the country until people start showing signs of remorse and show signs of whether they've been rehabilitated." References
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Original:  Mr Ferguson moved to Ipswich, north of Brisbane, w: Australia after being forced out of his previous home by picketers in Murgon in the South Burnett region of Queensland yesterday.
Revised:  Mr Ferguson moved to Ipswich, north of Brisbane, Australia after being forced out of his previous home by picketers in Murgon in the South Burnett region of Queensland yesterday.
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Original:  Pro-democracy demonstrators rallied before the meeting of the electoral college and also attempted to storm the voting center.
Revised:  Pro-democracy demonstrators rallied before the meeting of the election committee and also attempted to storm the voting center.
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Original:  An organizer of the demonstrations criticized Hong Kong for not being a "true democracy."
Revised:  An organizer of the demonstrations criticized Hong Kong as not a "true democracy."
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Original:  Leung will be Hong Kong's third elected chief executive.
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