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Original:  Whilst the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies,  Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits  , Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career having one hit in England, called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
Revised:  Whilst the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies, Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits with the Bee Gees , Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career having one hit in England, called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
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Original:  Whilst the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies,  Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits  , Robin became a solo artist early in the Bee Gees career having one hit in England, called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
Revised:  Whilst the three brothers are known for their blended vocal harmonies, Robin's voice can best be heard on the song . After several hits , Robin became a solo artist and had one hit in England, called "Saved by the Bell." After that, he rejoined his brothers and had more hits in the early 1970s.
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Original:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon."  Gibb and his son, , wrote the score for w:The Titanic Requiem|The Titanic Requiem , recorded by Royal Philharmonic Orchestra for the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic in April . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and  fell into a coma during April.
Revised:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon." For the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the in April, Gibb and his son, , wrote the score for w:The Titanic Requiem|The Titanic Requiem , recorded by Royal Philharmonic Orchestra for the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic in April . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and fell into a coma during April.
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Original:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon."  Gibb and his son, , wrote the score for w:The Titanic Requiem|The Titanic Requiem , recorded by Royal Philharmonic Orchestra for the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic in April . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and  fell into a coma during April.
Revised:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon." Gibb and his son, , wrote a score for , recorded by Royal Philharmonic Orchestra for the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic in April . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and fell into a coma during April.
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Original:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon."  Gibb and his son, , wrote the score for w:The Titanic Requiem|The Titanic Requiem , recorded by Royal Philharmonic Orchestra for the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic in April . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and  fell into a coma during April.
Revised:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon." Gibb and his son, , wrote the score for w:The Titanic Requiem|The Titanic Requiem , recorded by . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and fell into a coma during April.
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Original:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon."  Gibb and his son, , wrote the score for w:The Titanic Requiem|The Titanic Requiem , recorded by Royal Philharmonic Orchestra for the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic in April . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and  fell into a coma during April.
Revised:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon." Gibb and his son, , wrote the score for w:The Titanic Requiem|The Titanic Requiem , recorded by Royal Philharmonic Orchestra for the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic in April . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and he fell into a coma during April.
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Original:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon."  Gibb and his son, , wrote the score for w:The Titanic Requiem|The Titanic Requiem , recorded by Royal Philharmonic Orchestra for the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic in April . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and  fell into a coma during April.
Revised:  We're like the guys who have been to the moon." Gibb and his son, , wrote the score for w:The Titanic Requiem|The Titanic Requiem , recorded by Royal Philharmonic Orchestra for the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the Titanic in April . Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and fell into a coma later in April.
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Original:  Robin's younger brother was also a successful solo recording artist and died in 1988.
Revised:  Preceding Gibb in death were his younger brother , who was a successful solo recording artist and died in 1988.
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Original:  Gibb is survived by his 65-year-old brother Barry his sister and mother.
Revised:  Gibb is survived his 65-year-old brother Barry his sister and mother.
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Original:  Gibb is survived by his 65-year-old brother Barry his sister and mother.
Revised:  Gibb is survived by his 65-year-old brother Barry , a sister, and mother.
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Original:  It was during this period that the Bee Gee became known for their contributions to disco music.
Revised:  It was during this period that the Bee Gees became known for their contributions to disco music.
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Original:  He is also survived by his second wife Dwina Murphy and four children . sources%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Europe Category:England Category:Australia Category:Music Category:Obituaries Category:Culture and entertainme
Revised:  He is also survived by his second wife Dwina Murphy and four children sources%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Europe Category:England Category:Australia Category:Music Category:Obituaries Category:Culture and entertainme
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Original:  He is also survived by his second wife Dwina Murphy and four children . sources%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Europe Category:England Category:Australia Category:Music Category:Obituaries Category:Culture and entertainme
Revised:  He is also survived by his second wife Dwina Murphy and four children . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Europe Category:England Category:Australia Category:Music Category:Obituaries Category:Culture and entertainme
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Original: |Robin Gibb, 1949-2012.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Robin, and his twin brother , were born December 22, 1949, on the , raised in , and later lived in , . While the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England, they later made appearances on television in Australia, but the brothers had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% While the twins and their older brother began performing at a young age in England, they later made appearances on television in Australia, but the brothers had already moved back to England by the time they scored their first international hit in 1967.
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Original:  For the 100th Anniversary of the sinking of the in April, Gibb and his son, , wrote a score for , recorded by .Gibb was too ill to attend the premiere and he fell into a coma later in April.
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Original: Robin Gibb , singer, songwriter and member of the musical group Bee Gees , died Sunday in  , , of complications from colon and liver cancer.
Revised:  , singer, songwriter and member of the musical group Bee Gees , died Sunday in , , of complications from colon and liver cancer.
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Original: Robin Gibb , singer, songwriter and member of the musical group Bee Gees , died Sunday in  , , of complications from colon and liver cancer.
Revised: Robin Gibb , singer, songwriter and member of the musical group , died Sunday in , , of complications from colon and liver cancer.
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Original: Robin Gibb , singer, songwriter and member of the musical group Bee Gees , died Sunday in  , , of complications from colon and liver cancer.
Revised: Robin Gibb , singer, songwriter and member of the musical group Bee Gees , died Sunday in , of complications from colon and liver cancer.
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Original:  The clean-up is expected to take up to a week and cost more than $ A3 million.
Revised:  The clean-up is expected to take up to a week and cost more than $ 3 million.
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Original:  The spill occured in Gladstone Harbour on the central Queensland coast, late on Tuesday night, after 25,000 litres of heavy fuel poured from a coal carrier.
Revised:  The spill occurred in Gladstone Harbour on the central Queensland coast, late on Tuesday night, after 25,000 litres of heavy fuel poured from a coal carrier.
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Original:  About a tonne of oil was spilled in the harbour last week.
Revised:  About a tonne of oil spilled in the harbour last week.
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Original: El Salvador has officially presented ex-president Francisco Flores as it's official candidate for the post of Secretary General of the Organization of American States (OAS).
Revised: El Salvador has officially presented ex-president Francisco Flores as its official candidate for the post of Secretary General of the Organization of American States (OAS).
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Original:  The post became available after the previous Secretary General, Miguel Ángel Rodriguez, served only 24 days of his term of office , before returning home to Costa Rica to face corruption charges.
Revised:  The post became available after the previous Secretary General, Miguel Ángel Rodriguez, served only 24 days of his term of office before returning home to Costa Rica to face corruption charges.
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Original:  The El Salvador government claim to already have the support of 3 other Central American countries and the Dominican Republic for their candidate, but this may not be true because Guatemala is still deciding whether to officially nominate Rigoberta Menchú as an alternative candidate.
Revised:  The El Salvador government claims to already have the support of 3 other Central American countries and the Dominican Republic for their candidate, but this may not be true because Guatemala is still deciding whether to officially nominate Rigoberta Menchú as an alternative candidate.
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Original: El Salvador has officially presented ex-president Francisco Flores as its official candidate for the post of Secretary General of the Organization of American States (OAS).
Revised: El Salvador officially presented ex-president Francisco Flores as its official candidate for the post of Secretary General of the Organization of American States (OAS).
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Original:  The post became available after the previous Secretary General, Miguel Ángel Rodriguez, served only 24 days of his term of office before returning home to Costa Rica to face corruption charges.
Revised:  The previous Secretary General, Miguel Ángel Rodriguez, served only 24 days of his term of office before returning home to Costa Rica to face corruption charges.
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Original:  The post became available after the previous Secretary General, Miguel Ángel Rodriguez, served only 24 days of his term of office before returning home to Costa Rica to face corruption charges.
Revised:  The post became available after the previous Secretary General, Miguel Ángel Rodríguez, vacated the post after serving only 24 days of his term of office before returning home to Costa Rica to face corruption charges.
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Original:  The El Salvador government claims to already have the support of 3 other Central American countries and the Dominican Republic for their candidate , but this may not be true  because Guatemala is still deciding whether to officially nominate  Rigoberta Menchú as an alternative candidate.
Revised:  The Salvadoran government claims already to have the support of 3 other Central American countries and the Dominican Republic for their candidate , but this may not be true because Guatemala is still deciding whether to officially nominate Rigoberta Menchú as an alternative candidate.
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Original:  The El Salvador government claims to already have the support of 3 other Central American countries and the Dominican Republic for their candidate , but this may not be true  because Guatemala is still deciding whether to officially nominate  Rigoberta Menchú as an alternative candidate.
Revised:  The El Salvador government claims to already have the support of three other Central-American countries and the Dominican Republic for their candidate , but this may not be true because Guatemala is still deciding whether to officially nominate Rigoberta Menchú as an alternative candidate.
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Original:  The El Salvador government claims to already have the support of 3 other Central American countries and the Dominican Republic for their candidate , but this may not be true  because Guatemala is still deciding whether to officially nominate  Rigoberta Menchú as an alternative candidate.
Revised:  The El Salvador government claims to already have the support of 3 other Central American countries and the Dominican Republic for their candidate . This may not be true because Guatemala is still deciding whether to officially nominate Rigoberta Menchú as an alternative candidate.
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Original:  It is certain that Honduras is refusing to support Flores because of his refusal to accept the decision of the w: International Court of Justice in favour of Honduras over a territorial dispute between the 2 nations when he was president.
Revised:  It is certain that Honduras is refusing to support Flores because of his refusal to accept the decision of the International Court of Justice in favour of Honduras over a territorial dispute between the 2 nations when he was president.
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Original:  It is certain that Honduras is refusing to support Flores because of his refusal to accept the decision of the w: International Court of Justice in favour of Honduras over a territorial dispute between the 2 nations when he was president.
Revised:  It is certain that Honduras is refusing to support Flores because of his refusal to accept the decision of the w: International Court of Justice in favour of Honduras over a territorial dispute between the two nations when he was president.
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Original: __NOTOC__ Flag of West Papua West Papuan asylum seekers  who arrived in Australia last week, were forced to make a 4000 kilometre journey to Christmas Island despite suspicions they had tuberculosis.
Revised: __NOTOC__ Flag of West Papua West Papuan asylum seekers , who arrived in Australia last week, were forced to make a 4000 kilometre journey to Christmas Island despite suspicions they had tuberculosis.
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Original:  The West Papuans were herded on to an RAAF Hercules last week and flown to Christmas Island . Amid media scrutiny and the disapproval of the Indonesian Government , the boat people underwent health checks before being sent to Chrismas Island.
Revised:  The West Papuans were flown to Christmas Island on an RAAF Hercules last week and flown to Christmas Island . Amid media scrutiny and the disapproval of the Indonesian Government , the boat people underwent health checks before being sent to Chrismas Island.
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Original:  The West Papuans were herded on to an RAAF Hercules last week and flown to Christmas Island . Amid media scrutiny and the disapproval of the Indonesian Government , the boat people underwent health checks before being sent to Chrismas Island.
Revised:  The West Papuans were herded on to an RAAF Hercules last week . Amid media scrutiny and the disapproval of the Indonesian Government , the boat people underwent health checks before being sent to Chrismas Island.
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Original:  The West Papuans were herded on to an RAAF Hercules last week and flown to Christmas Island . Amid media scrutiny and the disapproval of the Indonesian Government , the boat people underwent health checks before being sent to Chrismas Island.
Revised:  The West Papuans were herded on to an RAAF Hercules last week and flown to Christmas Island . Amid media scrutiny and the disapproval of the Indonesian government , the boat people underwent health checks before being sent to Chrismas Island.
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Original: Criticism Photo from a Rally in Darwin, showing support for the West Papuan refugees, 24 January 2006 Rallies in Sydney, Melbourne, Darwin, Canberra and Brisbane were held this week, in support of the West Papuan asylum seekers.
Revised: Criticism Rallies in Sydney, Melbourne, Darwin, Canberra and Brisbane were held this week, in support of the West Papuan asylum seekers.
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Original:  Australain Aboriginal Flag "We're wanting to let all the people know that all the land in Australia has been given back to the Aboriginal people... and the sovereignty now lies with all Aboriginal nations," a spokesperson Robert Corowa said at the Embassy.
Revised:  Australian Aboriginal Flag "We're wanting to let all the people know that all the land in Australia has been given back to the Aboriginal people... and the sovereignty now lies with all Aboriginal nations," a spokesperson Robert Corowa said at the Embassy.
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Original: To many Indigenous and Non-Indigenous people, Australia Day was is labelled "Invasion Day" - in recognition of the colonisation of the continent by the British, he said.
Revised: To many Indigenous and Non-Indigenous people, Australia Day is labelled "Invasion Day" - in recognition of the colonisation of the continent by the British, he said.
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Original:   300px|Indigenous Australians communities, past and present Indigeneous Elders have gathered this week at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy for the Corroboree for Sovereignty convergence, in response to what they say is the continual Government threat to control the historical Tent Embassy site.
Revised:  300px|Indigenous Australians communities, past and present Indigeneous Elders have gathered this week at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy for the Corroboree (caveman talk for 'meeting') for Sovereignty convergence, in response to what they say is the continual Government threat to control the historical Tent Embassy site.
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Original: Representatives of Australian Aboriginal Sovereign Nations at a gathering in Canberra, have declared that the 26th of January would be known as Abo (aka Boong) Sovereignty Day.
Revised: Representatives of Australian Aboriginal Sovereign Nations at a gathering in Canberra, have declared that the 26th of January would be known as Aboriginal Sovereignty Day.
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Original:  While the rest of the country celebrated the Australia Day holiday with medals, barbecues, fireworks and beer under the Union Jack, hundreds of people at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy in Canberra lit a ceremonial fire in which the Australian flag was promptly used as kindling and discussed the land that once belonged to their ancestors.
Revised:  While the rest of the country celebrated the Australia Day holiday with medals, barbecues, fireworks and beer under the Union Jack, hundreds of people at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy in Canberra lit a ceremonial fire and discussed the land that once belonged to their ancestors.
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Original:  Despite this the abos still claim that by their traditional customs, the land owns them 300px|Indigenous Australians communities, past and present Indigeneous Elders have gathered this week at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy for the Corroboree (caveman talk for 'meeting') for Sovereignty convergence, in response to what they say is the continual Government threat to control the historical Tent Embassy site.
Revised:  300px|Indigenous Australians communities, past and present Indigeneous Elders have gathered this week at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy for the Corroboree (caveman talk for 'meeting') for Sovereignty convergence, in response to what they say is the continual Government threat to control the historical Tent Embassy site.
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Original:  Despite this the abos still claim that by their traditional customs, the land owns them 300px|Indigenous Australians communities, past and present Indigeneous Elders have gathered this week at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy for the Corroboree (caveman talk for 'meeting') for Sovereignty convergence, in response to what they say is the continual Government threat to control the historical Tent Embassy site.
Revised:  Despite this the abos still claim that by their traditional customs, the land owns them 300px|Indigenous Australians communities, past and present Indigeneous Elders have gathered this week at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy for the Corroboree for Sovereignty convergence, in response to what they say is the continual Government threat to control the historical Tent Embassy site.
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Original:  Mind you, if a group of australians of chinese or irish or african descent were to get together and do similar such activities, they would be condemned by the media and promptly imprisoned.
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Original:  The message will not be able to be read due to its being placed in the fire and turning to ash.
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Original:  The notion of the nation was foreign before 1788 so no real aussie gives a bugger.
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Original:  Having the department of child services take your children from you because you are a bloody drunk and spend all your welfare money on the piss and leave your kids to starve isnt genocide - its the total opposite.
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Original:  On Australia Day the diverse and vibrant group marched peacefully through Canberra, (burning Australian flags) gathered at the Embassy on the lawns in front of Old Parliament House and called for recognition of indigenous sovereignty over the land.
Revised:  On Australia Day the diverse and vibrant group marched peacefully through Canberra, gathered at the Embassy on the lawns in front of Old Parliament House and called for recognition of indigenous sovereignty over the land.
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Original:  Just months earlier, Sydney residents of lebanese descent were gaoled for 3 months for setting on fire the national flag.
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Original:  He said the words "for we are young and free" were a clear reference to the last 200 years of colonisation by Europeans and dismissed the ownership of the country by Aboriginal people - which has been dismissed by its own people who claim the land owns them
Revised:  He said the words "for we are young and free" were a clear reference to the last 200 years of colonisation by Europeans and dismissed the ownership of the country by Aboriginal people 
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Original:  300px|Indigenous Australians communities, past and present Indigeneous Elders have gathered this week at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy for the Corroboree for Sovereignty convergence, in response to what they say is the continual Government threat to control the historical Tent Embassy site.
Revised:  Indigeneous Elders have gathered this week at the Aboriginal Tent Embassy for the Corroboree for Sovereignty convergence, in response to what they say is the continual Government threat to control the historical Tent Embassy site.
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Original:  Australian Aboriginal Flag "We're wanting to let all the people know that all the land in Australia has been given back to the Aboriginal people... and the sovereignty now lies with all Aboriginal nations," a spokesperson Robert Corowa said at the Embassy.
Revised:  "We're wanting to let all the people know that all the land in Australia has been given back to the Aboriginal people... and the sovereignty now lies with all Aboriginal nations," a spokesperson Robert Corowa said at the Embassy.
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