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Original:   Others argue that it could make the situation worse.
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Original:  Local media recently reported 300 civilian deaths at the hands of the FNL during June and July . Burundi's President-elect recently suggested that the FNL could be allowed to join his government .
Revised:  Local media recently reported 300 civilian deaths at the hands of the FNL during June and July .
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Original: Action Contre Genocide's Emmanuel Nkurunziza  criticised the UN for what he called a "paradoxical" response to the massacre.
Revised: Action Contre Genocide's Emmanuel Nkurunziza today criticised the UN for what he called a "paradoxical" response to the massacre.
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Original: Burundi's refugee minister Francoise Ngendahayo today said that her government is committed to seeing justice for the victims of Gatumba.
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Original:  "Those responsible will be arrested but Burundi cannot do this work alone, we need the collaboration of the DR Congo and the UN", she told Reuters.
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Original:  A UN investigation found no evidence for this claim, and human rights groups pointed out that nearly half of the dead were children.
Revised:  The UN has found no evidence for this claim, and human rights groups pointed out that nearly half of the dead were children.
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Original: Category:Burundi Category:Africa Category:Main Page Category:Politics and conflicts |right Human rights groups around the world are marking the first anniversary of the Gatumba massacre, in which more than 150 Congolese "Banyamulenge"
Revised:  |right Human rights groups around the world are marking the first anniversary of the Gatumba massacre, in which more than 150 Congolese "Banyamulenge"
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Original:  Tutsis were killed, at a refugee camp in western Burundi. See als
Revised:  Tutsis were killed, at a refugee camp in western Burundi. Related new
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Original:  The expedition included the boy's father, stepmother, and three Sherpa guides  
Revised:  The expedition included the boy's father, stepmother, and three Sherpa guides . 
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Original:  The expedition included the boy's father, stepmother, and three Sherpa guides   .
Revised:  The expedition included the boy's father, stepmother, and three Sherpa guides . .
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Original:  A diagram showing the workings of the bomb Those arrested are believed to have had links with Faisal Shahzad, the primary suspect in the bombing, who was arrested on May 3 on board an aircraft at New York's JFK Airport and at least two are believed to have directly assisted with the financing of the attack  [   .
Revised:  A diagram showing the workings of the bomb Those arrested are believed to have had links with Faisal Shahzad, the primary suspect in the bombing, who was arrested on May 3 on board an aircraft at New York's JFK Airport and at least two are believed to have directly assisted with the financing of the attack . [ .
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Original:  A diagram showing the workings of the bomb Those arrested are believed to have had links with Faisal Shahzad, the primary suspect in the bombing, who was arrested on May 3 on board an aircraft at New York's JFK Airport and at least two are believed to have directly assisted with the financing of the attack  [   .
Revised:  A diagram showing the workings of the bomb Those arrested are believed to have had links with Faisal Shahzad, the primary suspect in the bombing, who was arrested on May 3 on board an aircraft at New York's JFK Airport and at least two are believed to have directly assisted with the financing of the attack [t .
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Original:  One of those arrested is believed to be the co-owner of a large company which provides catering to several embassies in Pakistan and some are believed to have been educated in the United States.
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Original:  The arrests follow a visit to Pakistan by two high-ranking American security officials—US National Security Adviser, Gen James Jones and Leon Panetta, director of the Central Intelligence Agency, both of whom praised Pakistan for its efforts in tracking down suspects in the bomb attack   .
Revised:  The arrests follow a visit to Pakistan by two high-ranking American security officials—US National Security Adviser, Gen James Jones and Leon Panetta, director of the Central Intelligence Agency, both of whom praised Pakistan for its efforts in tracking down suspects in the bomb attack . .
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Original:  A diagram showing the workings of the bomb Those arrested are believed to have had links with Faisal Shahzad, the primary suspect in the bombing, who was arrested on May 3 on board an aircraft at New York's JFK Airport and at least two are believed to have directly assisted with the financing of the attack .
Revised:  A diagram showing the workings of the bomb Those arrested are believed to have had links with Faisal Shahzad, the primary suspect in the bombing, who was arrested on May 3 on board an aircraft at New York's JFK Airport .
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Original:  One can’t make any conclusions.  
Revised:  One can’t make any conclusions. " 
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Original:  All of the money will be provided by the government of India  
Revised:  All of the money will be provided by the government of India . 
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Original:  The deputy governor of Diyala Province called for the sacking of police chiefs after the attack, the second in the town in as many months, and referring to the town as a "disaster zone".
Revised:  The deputy governor of called for the sacking of police chiefs after the attack, the second in the town in as many months, and referring to the town as a "disaster zone".
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Original:  There is speculation that Al Qaeda in Iraq, believed to be responsible for the most recent violence, have begun targeting more vulnerable towns and cities, away from Baghdad, where security is tighter  
Revised:  There is speculation that Al Qaeda in Iraq, believed to be responsible for the most recent violence, have begun targeting more vulnerable towns and cities, away from Baghdad, where security is tighter . 
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Original:  Greenhouses in the Gaza strip currently employ more than 4,000 people. by special envoy James Wolfenson has purchased these greenhouses with funds amounting to US$14 million.
Revised:  Greenhouses in the region currently employ more than 4,000 people. by special envoy James Wolfenson has purchased these greenhouses with funds amounting to US$14 million.
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Original:  Greenhouses in the Gaza strip currently employ more than 4,000 people. by special envoy James Wolfenson has purchased these greenhouses with funds amounting to US$14 million.
Revised:  Greenhouses in the Gaza strip currently employ more than 4,000 people. by special envoy James Wolfenson . Mr. Wolfenson will purchase the greenhouses using funds amounting to US$14 million.
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Original:  He will proceed to turn the properties over to Palestain . Daniel Ayalon, Israeli ambassador to the United States, spoke optimistically of the  agreement.
Revised:  He will proceed to turn the properties over to Palestine . Daniel Ayalon, Israeli ambassador to the United States, spoke optimistically of the agreement.
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Original:  He will proceed to turn the properties over to Palestain . Daniel Ayalon, Israeli ambassador to the United States, spoke optimistically of the  agreement.
Revised:  He will proceed to turn the properties over to Palestain . Daniel Ayalon, Israeli ambassador to the United States, spoke optimistically of the greenhouse agreement.
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Original:  A last minute deal reached Saturday dictates that about 1,000 Israeli settler greenhouses located in the Gaza strip will not be dismantled after Monday's pullout.
Revised: frame A last minute deal reached Saturday dictates that about 1,000 Israeli settler greenhouses located in the Gaza strip will not be dismantled after Monday's pullout.
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Original:  On the contrary, we are leaving behind means for them to take over and immediately better their situation.  
Revised:  On the contrary, we are leaving behind means for them to take over and immediately better their situation. " 
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Original:  " However, after many years of Israeli occupation, Gaza is a land where 80\% of the people now live in poverty
Revised:  However, after many years of Israeli occupation, Gaza is a land where 80\% of the people now live in poverty
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Original:  " However, after many years of Israeli occupation, Gaza is a land where 80\% of the people now live in poverty
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Original:  They believe the June 3 start date should not be held back  
Revised:  They believe the June 3 start date should not be held back . 
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Original:  They believe the June 3 start date should not be held back  
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Original: U.S. Dept. of Justice attorney for 40 years, Dave Margolies , was assigned by James Comey August 12 to take over his position as the acting Deputy Attorney General.
Revised: U.S. Dept. of Justice attorney for 40 years, Dave Margolis , was assigned by James Comey August 12 to take over his position as the acting Deputy Attorney General.
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Original:  The Comey departure, without Margolies stepping in, would have left two key posts at the Justice Department unfilled.
Revised:  The Comey departure, without Margolis stepping in, would have left two key posts at the Justice Department unfilled.
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Original:  Navy Lt. Commander (who testified for Kerry’s Iran Contra hearings) alledges that when David Margolis was the Domestic Criminal Section Chief, he helped limit the liability of Ronald Reagan and George H. W.Bush in the Iran-Contra affair.
Revised:  Navy Lt. Commander (who testified for Kerry’s Iran Contra hearings) alleges that when David Margolis was the Domestic Criminal Section Chief, he helped limit the liability of Ronald Reagan and George H. W.Bush in the Iran-Contra affair.
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Original:  Martin is also on record as having alledged that Margolis was part of a "restricted access group" known as RAG-1 which;
Revised:  Martin is also on record as having alleged that Margolis was part of a "restricted access group" known as RAG-1 which;
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Original:  Navy Lt. Commander (who testified for Kerry ’ s Iran-Contra hearings) alleges that when David Margolis was the Domestic Criminal Section Chief, he helped limit the liability of Ronald Reagan and George H. W. Bush in the Iran-Contra affair.
Revised:  Navy Lt. Commander (who testified for Kerry ' s Iran-Contra hearings) alleges that when David Margolis was the Domestic Criminal Section Chief, he helped limit the liability of Ronald Reagan and George H. W. Bush in the Iran-Contra affair.
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Original:  Martin is also on record as having alleged that Margolis was part of a "restricted access group" known as RAG-1, which "was first to develop and then to coordinate the CIA ’ s policy of trafficking in narcotics on a large-scale basis, in order to produce ongoing covert revenue streams pursuant to the aid and sustenance of illegal operations of state," according to Martin.
Revised:  Martin is also on record as having alleged that Margolis was part of a "restricted access group" known as RAG-1, which "was first to develop and then to coordinate the CIA ' s policy of trafficking in narcotics on a large-scale basis, in order to produce ongoing covert revenue streams pursuant to the aid and sustenance of illegal operations of state," according to Martin.
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Original: Kurmanbek Bakiev, July 2005 Kurmanbek Bakiev has been sworn in as the president of Kyrgyzstan after winning the elections one month ago with an 89\% majority.
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Original:  Following the exile of the previous president, Askar Akayev, Bakiev was appointed acting president until elections were held.
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Original:  Bakiev took his oath of office after a military parade, in front of diginitaries in Bishkek's central square
Revised:  NIGGA STOLE MY BIKE! 6680341
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Original:  However, an airline spokesman insisted that the plane was airworthy when it took off   .
Revised:  However, an airline spokesman insisted that the plane was airworthy when it took off . .
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Original: New Zealanders woke up this morning (Sunday ) to learn of the death of one of its most notable citizens.
Revised: New Zealanders woke up Sunday to learn of the death of one of its most notable citizens.
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Original:  Lange, 63, died of renal failure at 10pm on 13 August , a day after his family decided to discontinue his life support.
Revised:  Lange, 63, died of renal failure at 10 p.m. on August 13 , a day after his family decided to discontinue his life support.
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Original:  Lange, 63, died of renal failure at 10pm on 13 August , a day after his family decided to discontinue his life support.
Revised:  Lange, 63, died of renal failure at 10pm on 13 August , a day after his family decided to discontinue artificial life support.
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Original:  In 2002, he was diagnosed with amyloidosis, a rare and incurable blood plasma disorder.
Revised:  In 2002, he was diagnosed with amyloidosis, a rare and incurable blood disorder.
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Original:  His declining health resulted in the publication of his memoir My Life being brought forward to 8 August 2005.
Revised:  His declining health resulted in the publication of his memoir My Life being brought forward to August 8.
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Original:  Attempting to appease the left, Lange fired his right-wing Finance Minister, Roger Douglass , late in 1988.
Revised:  Attempting to appease the left, Lange fired his right-wing Finance Minister, Roger Douglas , late in 1988.
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Original:  Whether they agreed with his policies or not, they described him as a deeply compassionate man who would be sadly missed  
Revised:  Whether they agreed with his policies or not, they described him as a deeply compassionate man who would be sadly missed . 
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Original:  José Lima in 2004, playing for the Los Angeles Dodgers.
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Original:  Lima  played his best seasons with the Astros, including a 21-10 record in the 1999 season.
Revised:  Lima statistically played his best seasons with the Astros, including a 21-10 record in the 1999 season.
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Original:  I was a fan of his," said José Cruz , a former teammate of Lima's and a former first base coach for the Astros.
Revised:  I was a fan of his," said , a former teammate of Lima's and a former first base coach for the Astros.
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Original:  he was a good friend," added Cruz  
Revised:  he was a good friend," added Cruz . 
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Original: Clark was booted from the second season of Idol after it was discovred he hid a previous domestic violence arrest record from producers.
Revised: Clark was booted from the second season of Idol after it was discovered he hid a previous domestic violence arrest record from producers.
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Original:  Two years later, he told reporters that he had been involved in a secret romantic relationship with Adbul , which would have been a violation of the show's rules and Abdul's employment contract.
Revised:  Two years later, he told reporters that he had been involved in a secret romantic relationship with Abdul , which would have been a violation of the show's rules and Abdul's employment contract.
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Original:  In his work De Revolutionibus Orbium Coelestium he demonstrated, through mathematic and astronomical calculations, that the planets – incluiding Earth– rotated around the Sun
Revised:  In his work De Revolutionibus Orbium Coelestium he demonstrated, through mathematic and astronomical calculations, that the planets – including Earth– rotated around the Sun
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Original: Nicolaus Copernicus, Polish astronomer , was buried for the second time yesterday, in the Church of Frombork, in Poland.
Revised: Polish astronomer Nicolaus Copernicus was buried for the second time yesterday, in the Church of Frombork, in Poland.
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Original: Nicolaus Copernicus, Polish astronomer , was buried for the second time yesterday, in the Church of Frombork, in Poland.
Revised: Nicolaus Copernicus, Polish astronomer , was buried for the second time yesterday, in the Church of Frombork, Poland.
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Original:  Copernicus is considered the founder of modern astronomy, and known by proposing that the Earth rotated around the Sun, and not the other way, as was thought in that times .
Revised:  Copernicus is considered the founder of modern astronomy, and known for declaring that the Earth rotated around the Sun, and not the other way, as was thought in that times .
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Original:  Copernicus is considered the founder of modern astronomy, and known by proposing that the Earth rotated around the Sun, and not the other way, as was thought in that times .
Revised:  Copernicus is considered the founder of modern astronomy, and known by proposing that the Earth rotated around the Sun, contrary to popular belief at the time .
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Original:  His cadaver were found and exhumed in 2005 by Polish archaeologists in a nameless tomb in the same church.
Revised:  His body was discovered and exhumed in 2005 by Polish archaeologists in a nameless tomb in the same church.
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Original:  After the extraction, the cadaver was taken to a DNA test, that confirmed it was Copernicus', who died in 1543.
Revised:  After the extraction, the body was taken to a DNA test, that confirmed it was Copernicus', who died in 1543.
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Original:  In his times , Copernicus was considered an heretic due to his theory, that was published after his death.
Revised:  In his time , Copernicus was considered an heretic due to his theory, that was published after his death.
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Original:  In his times , Copernicus was considered an heretic due to his theory, that was published after his death.
Revised:  In his times , Copernicus was considered a heretic due to his theory, that was published after his death.
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Original:  After the extraction, the body was taken to a DNA test, that confirmed it was Copernicus ' , who died in 1543.
Revised:  After the extraction, the body was sent for DNA testing, which confirmed it was Copernicus ' , who died in 1543.
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Original:  After the extraction, the body was taken to a DNA test, that confirmed it was Copernicus ' , who died in 1543.
Revised:  After the extraction, the body was taken to a DNA test, that confirmed it was Copernicus , who died in 1543.
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Original:  Copernicus is considered the founder of modern astronomy, and known for declaring that the Earth revolved around the Sun, contrary to popular belief at the time.
Revised:  Copernicus is considered the founder of modern astronomy, and known for proposing that the Earth revolved around the Sun, contrary to popular belief at the time.
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Original:  Copernicus is considered the founder of modern astronomy, and known for proposing that the Earth revolved around the Sun, contrary to popular belief at the time.
Revised:  Copernicus is considered the founder of modern astronomy, and known for declaring that the Earth revolved around the Sun, contrary to popular belief at the time.
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Original: Toronto, Ontario police are currently investigating the human remains encapsulated in concrete from Lake Ontario.
Revised: Toronto, Ontario police are currently investigating human remains encapsulated in concrete from Lake Ontario.
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Original:  A barrel held the concrete encased body found offshore at the Toronto waterfront.
Revised:  A barrel held the concrete-encased body found offshore at the Toronto waterfront.
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Original:  Ontario provincial police OPP are also investigating two other bodies this long weekend in May.
Revised:  Ontario provincial police (OPP) are also investigating two other bodies this long weekend in May.
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Original:  Human remains were found in a subdivision construction area near Barrie , Ontario and a body was also found near Huntsville , Ontario in a roadside ditch.
Revised:  Human remains were found in a construction area near Barrie , Ontario and a body was also found near Huntsville , Ontario in a roadside ditch.
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Original:  Human remains were found in a subdivision construction area near Barrie , Ontario and a body was also found near Huntsville , Ontario in a roadside ditch.
Revised:  Human remains were found in a subdivision construction area near Barrie and a body was also found near Huntsville , Ontario in a roadside ditch.
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Original:  Human remains were found in a subdivision construction area near Barrie , Ontario and a body was also found near Huntsville , Ontario in a roadside ditch.
Revised:  Human remains were found in a subdivision construction area near Barrie , Ontario and a body was also found near Huntsville in a roadside ditch.
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Original:  A firebombing at a Royal Bank of Canada branch in Ottawa has sent out an urgent call for OPP re-inforcements.
Revised:  A firebombing at a Royal Bank of Canada branch in Ottawa has resulted in an urgent call for OPP re-inforcements.
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Original:  The black box cockpit voice recorder from an Air India flight that crashed into a valley of near the southern Indian city of Mangalore Saturday, killing 158 of the 160 onboard, has been found by investigators.
Revised:  The black boxes from an Air India flight that crashed into a valley of near the southern Indian city of Mangalore Saturday, killing 158 of the 160 onboard, has been found by investigators.
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Original:  The black box cockpit voice recorder from an Air India flight that crashed into a valley of near the southern Indian city of Mangalore Saturday, killing 158 of the 160 onboard, has been found by investigators.
Revised:  The black box cockpit voice recorder from an Air India flight that crashed into a valley of near the southern Indian city of Mangalore Saturday, killing 158 of the 160 onboard, have been found by investigators.
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Original:  The flight data recorder had been recovered late Sunday . thumbnail|Air India Express Boeing 737 at Mangalore Airport According to reports, the plane touched down at Mangalore's Bajpe airport, overshooting the touchdown point by several thousand feet , one tire did not hit the runway at all.
Revised:  The flight data recorder had been recovered late Sunday . thumbnail|Air India Express Boeing 737 at Mangalore Airport According to reports, the plane touched down at Mangalore's Bajpe airport, overshooting the touchdown point by several thousand feet ; one tire did not hit the runway at all.
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Original:  The black box records communication data, technical information such as speed, altitude, etc., as well as conversation in the airplane cockpit, which could help investigators determine why the jet crashed.
Revised:  The black boxes record communication data, technical information such as speed, altitude, etc., as well as conversation in the airplane cockpit, which could help investigators determine why the jet crashed.
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Original:    Air India Express Boeing 737-800, which had departed from Dubai of the United Arab Emirates  was bound for Mangalore in the southern Indian state of Karnataka.
Revised:  The Air India Express Boeing 737-800, which had departed from Dubai of the United Arab Emirates was bound for Mangalore in the southern Indian state of Karnataka.
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