wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  In the opening minutes of the second quarter, Shelley Chaplin assisted Cobi Crispin  and then Amber Merritt  to add another four points.
Revised:  In the opening minutes of the second quarter, Shelley Chaplin assisted Cobi Crispin and then Amber Merritt , to add another four points.
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Original:  Whereas Mexico missed two shots before scoring , and on the next play  allowed Amanda Carter to steal the ball, allowing Amber Merritt to score again.
Revised:  Attempting to respond, Mexico missed two shots before scoring , and on the next play allowed Amanda Carter to steal the ball, allowing Amber Merritt to score again.
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Original:  Whereas Mexico missed two shots before scoring , and on the next play  allowed Amanda Carter to steal the ball, allowing Amber Merritt to score again.
Revised:  Whereas Mexico missed two shots before scoring then, on the next play allowed Amanda Carter to steal the ball, allowing Amber Merritt to score again.
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Original:  Whereas Mexico missed two shots before scoring , and on the next play  allowed Amanda Carter to steal the ball, allowing Amber Merritt to score again.
Revised:  Whereas Mexico missed two shots before scoring , and on the next play , allowed Amanda Carter to steal the ball, allowing Amber Merritt to score again.
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Original:  This was followed by  steals by Cobi Crispin and Amber Merritt, allowing Shelley Chaplin to score . Mexico scored twice , but Australia responded each time, with goals by Amber Merritt and Amanda Carter, who drew a foul, making it a three point play.
Revised:  This was followed by steals by Cobi Crispin and Amber Merritt, giving Shelley Chaplin more scoring opportunities . Mexico scored twice , but Australia responded each time, with goals by Amber Merritt and Amanda Carter, who drew a foul, making it a three point play.
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Original:  This was followed by  steals by Cobi Crispin and Amber Merritt, allowing Shelley Chaplin to score . Mexico scored twice , but Australia responded each time, with goals by Amber Merritt and Amanda Carter, who drew a foul, making it a three point play.
Revised:  This was followed by steals by Cobi Crispin and Amber Merritt, allowing Shelley Chaplin to score . Mexico scored twice ; but, Australia responded each time, with goals by Amber Merritt and Amanda Carter, who drew a foul, making it a three point play.
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Original:  This was followed by  steals by Cobi Crispin and Amber Merritt, allowing Shelley Chaplin to score . Mexico scored twice , but Australia responded each time, with goals by Amber Merritt and Amanda Carter, who drew a foul, making it a three point play.
Revised:  This was followed by steals by Cobi Crispin and Amber Merritt, allowing Shelley Chaplin to score . Mexico scored twice , but Australia responded each time, with goals by Amber Merritt and Amanda Carter, who was fouled, making her's a three-point play.
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Original:  A steal led to a runaway break by Amber Merritt, bring her bag to ten points, and the score to 38-16.
Revised:  A steal led to a runaway break by Amber Merritt, bringing her contribution to ten points, and the score to 38-16.
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Original:  A steal led to a runaway break by Amber Merritt, bring her bag to ten points, and the score to 38-16.
Revised:  A steal led to a runaway break by Amber Merritt, bring her bag to ten points, and the score to 38 points to 16.
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Original:  A timeout and a series of missed shots by Katie Hill, Brodie Kean and Cobi Crispin saw Mexico stage a minor recovery , outscoring Australia for the quarter by 6-7 , leaving the score at 50-27 at three quartertime .
Revised:  A timeout and a series of missed shots by Katie Hill, Brodie Kean and Cobi Crispin , gave Mexico a chance to stage a minor recovery , outscoring Australia for the quarter by 6-7 , leaving the score at 50-27 at three quartertime .
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Original:  A timeout and a series of missed shots by Katie Hill, Brodie Kean and Cobi Crispin saw Mexico stage a minor recovery , outscoring Australia for the quarter by 6-7 , leaving the score at 50-27 at three quartertime .
Revised:  A timeout and a series of missed shots by Katie Hill, Brodie Kean and Cobi Crispin saw Mexico stage a minor recovery by outscoring Australia for the quarter by 6-7 , leaving the score at 50-27 at three quartertime .
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Original:  A timeout and a series of missed shots by Katie Hill, Brodie Kean and Cobi Crispin saw Mexico stage a minor recovery , outscoring Australia for the quarter by 6-7 , leaving the score at 50-27 at three quartertime .
Revised:  A timeout and a series of missed shots by Katie Hill, Brodie Kean and Cobi Crispin saw Mexico stage a minor recovery , outscoring Australia for the quarter by 6-7 , leaving the score at 50 to 27 at the end of the third quarter .
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Original:  The final quarter began unimpressively for both teams .
Revised:  The final quarter got off to an unimpressive start for both teams .
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Original:  The final quarter began unimpressively for both teams .
Revised:  The final quarter began unimpressively for both teams ;
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Original:  Australia's Leanne del Toso missed a shot at one end, and then Mexico's Floralia Estrada Bernal missed at the other.
Revised:  Australia's Leanne del Toso missed a shot at one end, and Mexico's Floralia Estrada Bernal missed at the other.
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Original:  Australia's Leanne del Toso missed a shot at one end, and then Mexico's Floralia Estrada Bernal missed at the other.
Revised:  Australia's Leanne del Toso missed a shot at one end, and then Mexico's Floralia Estrada Bernal missed one at the the other.
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Original:  A Mexican turnover led to the first score of the quarter, by Sarah Stewart.
Revised:  A Mexican turnover led to the first scoring of the quarter, by Sarah Stewart.
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Original:  Another shot by Sarah Stewart missed , but Amanda Carter took an offensive rebound, and eventually made a basket.
Revised:  Another shot by Sarah Stewart missed ; but, Amanda Carter took an offensive rebound, and eventually made a basket.
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Original:  Another shot by Sarah Stewart missed , but Amanda Carter took an offensive rebound, and eventually made a basket.
Revised:  Another shot by Sarah Stewart missed , but Amanda Carter took an offensive rebound, which eventually made it into the basket.
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Original:  Successive fouls sent Bridie Kean to the free through line to score three points.
Revised:  Successive fouls sent Bridie Kean to the free throw line to score three points.
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Original:  Amber Merritt brought the score to 59-35 and her seventh scoring shot.
Revised:  Amber Merritt brought the score to 59 points to 35 with her seventh scoring shot.
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Original:  By now , Australia was deliberately running down the clock, passing the ball around  and taking shots at the last minute.
Revised:  By this point , Australia was deliberately running down the clock, passing the ball around and taking shots at the last minute.
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Original:  By now , Australia was deliberately running down the clock, passing the ball around  and taking shots at the last minute.
Revised:  By now , Australia was deliberately running down the clock, passing the ball around , and taking shots at the last minute.
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Original:  This led to a series of missed shots by Sarah Vinci and Katie Hill, but Mexico seemed unable to capitalise  .
Revised:  This led to several missed shots by Sarah Vinci and Katie Hill, but Mexico seemed unable to capitalise .
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Original:  This led to a series of missed shots by Sarah Vinci and Katie Hill, but Mexico seemed unable to capitalise  .
Revised:  This led to a series of missed shots by Sarah Vinci and Katie Hill, with Mexico unable to capitalise .
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Original:  This led to a series of missed shots by Sarah Vinci and Katie Hill, but Mexico seemed unable to capitalise  .
Revised:  This led to a series of missed shots by Sarah Vinci and Katie Hill, but Mexico seemed unable to capitalise on the opportunities .
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Original:  Under intense Australian defensive pressure, Mexico missed shots and turned over the ball as often as before.
Revised:  Under intense Australian defensive pressure, Mexico missed shots and turned over the ball as-often as before.
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Original:  With 19 seconds left to play , Katie Hill took a two point shot from inside the paint .
Revised:  With nineteen seconds of play remaining , Katie Hill took a two point shot from inside the paint .
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Original:   Mexico's Wendy Garcia Amador scored the last two points of the game, but the final score of 62-37 meant that Mexico 's Paralympic campaign was over.
Revised:  Although Mexico's Wendy Garcia Amador scored the last two points of the game, but the final score of 62-37 meant that Mexico 's Paralympic campaign was over.
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Original:   Mexico's Wendy Garcia Amador scored the last two points of the game, but the final score of 62-37 meant that Mexico 's Paralympic campaign was over.
Revised:  Mexico's Wendy Garcia Amador scored the last two points of the game, the final score of 62-37 meant that Mexico 's Paralympic campaign was over.
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Original:   Mexico's Wendy Garcia Amador scored the last two points of the game, but the final score of 62-37 meant that Mexico 's Paralympic campaign was over.
Revised:  Mexico's Wendy Garcia Amador scored the last two points of the game, but the final score of 62 points to 37 meant the Mexican team 's Paralympic campaign was over.
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Original:  Australia now has to confront the winner of tonight's United States versus Canada game on Thursday
Revised:  Australia must now confront the winner of tonight's United States versus Canada game on Thursday
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Original:  Australia now has to confront the winner of tonight's United States versus Canada game on Thursday
Revised:  Australia now has to confront the winner of tonight's versus game on Thursday
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Original: Winners of their group, Australia have never taken the gold gold ;
Revised: Winners of their group, Australia have never taken the gold in ;
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Original: In an NZ$41 million deal , that was announced Monday night, the New Zealand telecommunications company, Vodafone has bought Internet service provider (ISP) ihug New Zealand Ltd.
Revised: In an NZ$41 million deal announced Monday night, the New Zealand telecommunications company, Vodafone has bought Internet service provider (ISP) ihug New Zealand Ltd.
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Original:  He says it really sets the direction Vodafone wants to go for services, new applications and new content."
Revised:  It really sets the direction Vodafone wants to go for services, new applications and new content."
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Original: "It ’ s a perfect fit.
Revised: "It ' s a perfect fit.
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Original:  When combined with ihug ’ s strength in fixed line broadband and calling, we can develop and deliver even more compelling propositions for our customers.
Revised:  When combined with ihug ' s strength in fixed line broadband and calling, we can develop and deliver even more compelling propositions for our customers.
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Original:  It ’ s a very exciting time, with two strong challengers coming together to take on the competition," he said.
Revised:  It ' s a very exciting time, with two strong challengers coming together to take on the competition," he said.
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Original:  CEO for ihug, Mark Rushworth said: "We ’ re thrilled with this news.
Revised:  CEO for ihug, Mark Rushworth said: "We ' re thrilled with this news.
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Original:  Seven teams — the U.S., Brazil, Australia, Canada, Denmark, Italy and South Korea — and not eight will compete at the end of October in the first edition of the 2006 Peace Queen feminine soccer Cup to be held in six South Korean cities.
Revised:  Seven teams — the U.S., Brazil, Australia, Canada, Denmark, Italy and South Korea — and not eight will compete in the first edition of the 2006 Peace Queen feminine soccer Cup to be held in six South Korean cities.
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Original:  Seven teams — the U.S., Brazil, Australia, Canada, Denmark, Italy and South Korea — and not eight will compete at the end of October in the first edition of the 2006 Peace Queen feminine soccer Cup to be held in six South Korean cities.
Revised:  Seven teams — the U.S., Brazil, Australia, Canada, Denmark, Italy and South Korea — and not eight will compete at the end of October in the first edition of the tournament to be held in six South Korean cities.
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Original:  A South Korean businessman acting as an agent for the North's team of this 200,000 dollar competition tried to explain organizers Monday about the difficult reported Huh Kyung-rak, an official of the organizing committee.
Revised:  A South Korean businessman acting as an agent for the North's team for this 200,000 dollar competition tried to explain organizers Monday about the difficult reported Huh Kyung-rak, an official of the organizing committee.
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Original: A South Korean businessman acting as an agent for the North's team for this 200,000 dollar competition tried to explain organizers Monday about the difficult reported Huh Kyung-rak, an official of the organizing committee . "He cited that the situation is complex, " Huh said.
Revised: A South Korean businessman acting as a North's team for this 200,000 dollar competition tried to explain organizers Monday about the difficult reported Huh Kyung-rak, an official of the organizing committee . "He cited that the situation is complex, " Huh said.
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Original: A South Korean businessman acting as an agent for the North's team for this 200,000 dollar competition tried to explain organizers Monday about the difficult reported Huh Kyung-rak, an official of the organizing committee . "He cited that the situation is complex, " Huh said.
Revised: A South Korean businessman acting as an agent for the North's agent for this 200,000 dollar competition tried to explain organizers Monday about the difficult reported Huh Kyung-rak, an official of the organizing committee . "He cited that the situation is complex, " Huh said.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: A South Korean businessman acting as an agent for the North's team for this 200,000 dollar competition tried to explain organizers Monday about the difficult reported Huh Kyung-rak, an official of the organizing committee . "He cited that the situation is complex, " Huh said.
Revised: A South Korean businessman acting as an agent for the North's team for this 200,000 dollar competition tried to explain organizers Monday about the difficulties arising in this complex situation . "He cited that the situation is complex, " Huh said.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Seven teams — the U.S. , Brazil, Australia, Canada, Denmark, Italy and South Korea — and not eight will compete in the first edition of the tournament to be held in six South Korean cities.
Revised: Seven teams — the United States , Brazil, Australia, Canada, Denmark, Italy and South Korea — and not eight will compete in the first edition of the tournament to be held in six South Korean cities.
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Original:  A South Korean businessman acting as a North's agent for this 200,000 dollar competition tried to explain organizers Monday about the difficulties arising in this complex situation .
Revised:  A South Korean businessman on Monday that the "complex situation" would make it difficult for North Korea to participate .
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Original:  He did not mention once the famous nuclear test and the South's official told the AFP correspondant : "We decided to find a substitute team.
Revised:  Huh Kyung-rak, organising committee official, suggested that North Korea's nuclear test had led to the decision, adding "We decided to find a substitute team.
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Original:  A transportation and road system that works, allowing shorter commutes, less enviromental impact and greater opportunities for families to share time together.
Revised:  A transportation and road system that works, allowing shorter commutes, less environmental impact and greater opportunities for families to share time together.
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Original:  The city has already declared 2007 to be a difficult budget year and we must be very aggresive in finding ways to curb our ballooning tax bill.
Revised:  The city has already declared 2007 to be a difficult budget year and we must be very aggressive in finding ways to curb our ballooning tax bill.
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Original:  A: I feel that I can offer the best of both worlds- someone who is energetic and full of fresh ideas, while also still having the experience and knowledge of the process to be an effective public servant right from the begining .
Revised:  A: I feel that I can offer the best of both worlds- someone who is energetic and full of fresh ideas, while also still having the experience and knowledge of the process to be an effective public servant right from the beginning .
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Original:  do you agree completely with this decision, would you have slowed development even further, or not have imposed a cap at all? A: Q: What are your opinions on Brampton's congestion and the level of public transit funding?
Revised:  do you agree completely with this decision, would you have slowed development even further, or not have imposed a cap at all? A: What are your opinions on Brampton's congestion and the level of public transit funding?
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Original: Nontheless , shops in Dadar remained closed and traffic was diverted away from the area.
Revised: Nonetheless , shops in Dadar remained closed and traffic was diverted away from the area.
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Original:  Four riot control untits have also been dispatched to maintain the peace
Revised:  Four riot control units have also been dispatched to maintain the peace
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Original: JPG|Screenshot of Al Jazeera homepage on Tuesday ]] The website of international news service Al Jazeera English was hacked today by a group idenitified only as Al-Rashedon.
Revised: JPG|Screenshot of Al Jazeera homepage on Tuesday ]] The website of international news service Al Jazeera was hacked today by a group idenitified only as Al-Rashedon.
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Original:  As well as identifying the group which hacked the website in English and Arabic, the bottom left of the image also contains an Arabic language statement from the group criticising Al-Jazeera for its coverage of the .
Revised:  As well as identifying the group which hacked the website in English and Arabic, the bottom left of the image also contains an Arabic language statement from the group criticising Al Jazeera for its coverage of the .
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Original:  The site reports that some users have not been able to access the website  
Revised:  The site reports that some users have not been able to access the website . 
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Original: Gordon Brown, Chancellor of the Exchequer, announced today that an Order in Council will be made tomorrow empowering the British Treasury to prevent the funding of those suspected of planning terror by the use of forensic accounting and  methods similar to those employed by the code breakers at Bletchley Park who cracked the German Enigma code during WWII.
Revised: Gordon Brown, Chancellor of the Exchequer, announced today that an Order in Council will be made tomorrow empowering the British Treasury to prevent the funding of those suspected of planning terror . Use will be made of forensic accounting and methods similar to those employed by the code breakers at Bletchley Park who cracked the German Enigma code during WWII.
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Original: Gordon Brown, Chancellor of the Exchequer, announced today that an Order in Council will be made tomorrow empowering the British Treasury to prevent the funding of those suspected of planning terror by the use of forensic accounting and  methods similar to those employed by the code breakers at Bletchley Park who cracked the German Enigma code during WWII.
Revised: Gordon Brown, Chancellor of the Exchequer, announced today that an Order in Council will be made tomorrow empowering the British Treasury to prevent the funding of those suspected of planning terror by the use of forensic accounting and of methods similar to those employed by the code breakers at Bletchley Park who cracked the German Enigma code during WWII.
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Original: Gordon Brown, Chancellor of the Exchequer, announced today that an Order in Council will be made tomorrow empowering the British Treasury to prevent the funding of those suspected of planning terror by the use of forensic accounting and  methods similar to those employed by the code breakers at Bletchley Park who cracked the German Enigma code during WWII.
Revised: Gordon Brown, Chancellor of the Exchequer, announced today that an Order in Council will be made tomorrow empowering the British Treasury to prevent the funding of those suspected of planning terror by the use of forensic accounting and methods similar to those employed by the code breakers at Bletchley Park . With the help of computing power to discover relations between bits of information, they cracked the German Enigma code during WWII.
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Original:  He ranked the impact of forensic accounting at the present time with the use of fingerprinting in the 19th century and of DNA in the late 20th Century.
Revised:  Gordon Brown ranks the impact of forensic accounting at the present time with the use of fingerprinting in the 19th century and of DNA in the late 20th Century.
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Original:  There will be a  licensing system requiring firms to keep more detailed records of transactions and there will be tougher action against non-compliance .
Revised:  There will be a new licensing system requiring firms to keep more detailed records of transactions and there will be tougher action against non-compliance .
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Original:  There will be a  licensing system requiring firms to keep more detailed records of transactions and there will be tougher action against non-compliance .
Revised:  There will be a licensing system requiring firms to keep more detailed records of transactions . Tougher action against non-compliance .
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Original:  The new Order will empower the Treasury  for the first time  to use closed source evidence from classified intelligence to freeze assets .
Revised:  The new Order will empower the Treasury , for the first time to use closed source evidence from classified intelligence to freeze assets .
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Original:  The new Order will empower the Treasury  for the first time  to use closed source evidence from classified intelligence to freeze assets .
Revised:  The new Order will empower the Treasury for the first time , to use closed source evidence from classified intelligence to freeze assets .
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Original:  If such evidence shows it to be necessary, Brown said, that suspects should be held, without a charge being brought, for more than the present 28 days.
Revised:  If evidence shows it to be necessary, Brown said, that suspects should be held, without a charge being brought, for more than the present 28 days.
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Original:  If such evidence shows it to be necessary, Brown said, that suspects should be held, without a charge being brought, for more than the present 28 days.
Revised:  If such evidence shows it to be necessary, it is Brown's opinion that suspects should be held, without a charge being brought, for more than the present 28 days.
Edit intent: clarity