wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Sunday morning there where no real line ups for registration.
Revised:  Sunday morning there were no real line ups for registration.
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Original:  " A few competitors explored the shopping mall during this time.
Revised:  A few competitors explored the shopping mall during this time.
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Original:  " In Toronto 2003 the line up lasted about 18 hours before I got passed the first step.
Revised:  In Toronto 2003 the line up lasted about 18 hours before I got passed the first step.
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Original:  " Anxiety was in the air and to sooth the feeling a lot of people socialized.
Revised:  Anxiety was in the air and to sooth the feeling a lot of people socialized.
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Original:  I talked to closest person a girl called Bambi that sings regularly at a local pub called the Royal Oaks.
Revised:  I talked to the closest person to me, a girl called Bambi that sings regularly at a local pub called the Royal Oaks.
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Original:  As I wait in line I wondered if I should practice my songs.
Revised:  As I waited in line I wondered if I should practice my songs.
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Original:  Within no time, we where up! by groups of five we where called to sing in front of two judges  .
Revised:  Within no time, we were up! We were called to sing in front of two judges .
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Original:  Participant may now be between the age of 16 and 28 years old.
Revised:  Participants may now be between the age of 16 and 28 years old.
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Original: Carey announced that next week's program will show more abuse pictures, but he noted that some images featuring prisoners in sexually humiliating acts will not be broadcast  as they were deemed too graphic.
Revised: Carey announced that next week's program will show more abuse pictures, but he noted that some images featuring prisoners in sexually humiliating acts will not be broadcast , as they were deemed too graphic.
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Original:  The Washington Post has come out to say that , as was suggested by SBS,  several news outlets including themselves have "not published a substantial number of photographs they are holding."
Revised:  The Washington Post has come out to say , as was suggested by SBS, several news outlets including themselves have "not published a substantial number of photographs they are holding."
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Original:  The Washington Post has come out to say that , as was suggested by SBS,  several news outlets including themselves have "not published a substantial number of photographs they are holding."
Revised:  The Washington Post has come out to say that , as was suggested by SBS, that several news outlets including themselves have "not published a substantial number of photographs they are holding."
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Original:  Salon notes that some of the files from the Criminal Investigation Command refer to CIA agents that interrogated prisoners at Abu Ghraib, but that no CIA offices have been prosecuted "despite the death of at least one Iraqi during a CIA interrogation there", undermining the claim made by SBS that some of the pictures document previously unprosecuted abuse.
Revised:  Salon notes that some of the files from the Criminal Investigation Command refer to CIA agents that interrogated prisoners at Abu Ghraib, but that no CIA officers have been prosecuted "despite the death of at least one Iraqi during a CIA interrogation there", undermining the claim made by SBS that some of the pictures document previously unprosecuted abuse.
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Original:  BBC quotes John Bellinger of the state department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the detainees themselves to have these photographs come out" and that the publication could also "fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
Revised:  BBC quotes John Bellinger of the State Department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the detainees themselves to have these photographs come out" and that the publication could also "fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
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Original: The Australian has reported that the the Pentagon has confirmed the authenticity of the images aired by  SBS. Contradicting claims made by some media outlets,  Dateline's executive producer Mike Carey claimed on Thursday that the program's researchers have found cases of Abu Ghraib prisoner abuse that have not been dealt with by US authorities.
Revised: The Australian has reported today that the Pentagon has confirmed the authenticity of the images aired by SBS. Contradicting claims made by some media outlets, Dateline's executive producer Mike Carey claimed on Thursday that the program's researchers have found cases of Abu Ghraib prisoner abuse that have not been dealt with by US authorities.
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Original: The Australian has reported that the the Pentagon has confirmed the authenticity of the images aired by  SBS. Contradicting claims made by some media outlets,  Dateline's executive producer Mike Carey claimed on Thursday that the program's researchers have found cases of Abu Ghraib prisoner abuse that have not been dealt with by US authorities.
Revised: The Australian has reported that the the Pentagon has confirmed the authenticity of the images aired by Australian televison network SBS. Contradicting claims made by some media outlets, Dateline's executive producer Mike Carey claimed on Thursday that the program's researchers have found cases of Abu Ghraib prisoner abuse that have not been dealt with by US authorities.
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Original: The Australian has reported that the the Pentagon has confirmed the authenticity of the images aired by  SBS. Contradicting claims made by some media outlets,  Dateline's executive producer Mike Carey claimed on Thursday that the program's researchers have found cases of Abu Ghraib prisoner abuse that have not been dealt with by US authorities.
Revised: The Australian has reported that the the Pentagon has confirmed the authenticity of the images aired by SBS. Contradicting claims made by some media outlets, SBS Dateline's executive producer Mike Carey claimed on Thursday that the program's researchers have found cases of Abu Ghraib prisoner abuse that have not been dealt with by US authorities.
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Original:  The Washington Post has come out to say, as was suggested by SBS, that several news outlets including themselves have "not published a substantial number of photographs they are holding."
Revised:  The Washington Post has noted, as suggested by SBS, that several news outlets including themselves have "not published a substantial number of photographs they are holding."
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Original:  The U.S. internet new site Salon has now published some of their own previously held back pictures and confirmed that they possess "files and other electronic documents from an internal Army investigation into the Abu Ghraib prisoner-abuse scandal", which include the originally published pictures, as well as the ones published by SBS.
Revised:  The U.S. internet news site Salon has now published some of their own previously held back pictures and confirmed that they possess "files and other electronic documents from an internal Army investigation into the Abu Ghraib prisoner-abuse scandal", which include the originally published pictures, as well as the ones published by SBS.
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Original:  BBC quotes John Bellinger of the State Department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the  detainees themselves to have these photographs come out " and that the publication could also " fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
Revised:  John Bellinger of the State Department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the detainees themselves to have these photographs come out " and that the publication could also " fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
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Original:  BBC quotes John Bellinger of the State Department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the  detainees themselves to have these photographs come out " and that the publication could also " fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
Revised:  BBC quotes John Bellinger of the State Department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the privacy of the detainees themselves to have these photographs come out " and that the publication could also " fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
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Original:  BBC quotes John Bellinger of the State Department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the  detainees themselves to have these photographs come out " and that the publication could also " fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
Revised:  BBC quotes John Bellinger of the State Department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the detainees themselves to have these photographs come out ... ( and that the publication could also " fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
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Original:  BBC quotes John Bellinger of the State Department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the  detainees themselves to have these photographs come out " and that the publication could also " fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
Revised:  BBC quotes John Bellinger of the State Department saying "We felt that it was an invasion of the detainees themselves to have these photographs come out " and that the publication could also ) fan the flames around the world and cause potentially further violence".
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Original: The US govenment expressed concerns about the new abuse pictures being published.
Revised: The US government expressed concerns about the new abuse pictures being published.
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Original: The Australian has reported today that the Pentagon has confirmed the authenticity of the images aired by Australian televison network SBS. Contradicting claims made by some media outlets, SBS Dateline's executive producer Mike Carey claimed on Thursday that the program's researchers have found cases of Abu Ghraib prisoner abuse that have not been dealt with by US authorities.
Revised: The Australian has reported today that the Pentagon has confirmed the authenticity of the images aired by Australian television network SBS. Contradicting claims made by some media outlets, SBS Dateline's executive producer Mike Carey claimed on Thursday that the program's researchers have found cases of Abu Ghraib prisoner abuse that have not been dealt with by US authorities.
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Original:  The Washington Post has noted, as suggested by SBS, that several news outlets including themselves have "not published a substantial number of photographs they are holding."
Revised:  The has noted, as suggested by SBS, that several news outlets including themselves have "not published a substantial number of photographs they are holding."
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Original: Authorities across Europe have issued restrictions on commercial poultry farms  following the outbreak of bird flu in eight previously unaffected nations.
Revised: Authorities across Europe have issued restrictions on commercial poultry farms , following the outbreak of bird flu in eight previously unaffected nations.
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Original:  The virus has been found in migaratory birds , much earlier than had been expected.
Revised:  The virus has been found in migaratory birds much earlier than had been expected.
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Original:  The H5N1 strain of bird flu is highly contagous and lethal to birds.
Revised:  The H5N1 strain of bird flu is highly contagious, and lethal to birds.
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Original:  A single outbreak can kill tens of thousands of birds  and forces all of the birds in a wide region to be culled to prevent the spread of the disease.
Revised:  A single outbreak can kill tens of thousands of birds , and forces all of the birds in a wide region to be culled to prevent the spread of the disease.
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Original: The European Union has toughened it's bans on poultry products and now bans the importation of untreated bird feathers into it's 25 member nations.
Revised: The European Union has toughened its bans on poultry products and now bans the importation of untreated bird feathers into it's 25 member nations.
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Original: The European Union has toughened it's bans on poultry products and now bans the importation of untreated bird feathers into it's 25 member nations.
Revised: The European Union has toughened it's bans on poultry products and now bans the importation of untreated bird feathers into its 25 member nations.
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Original:  The EU also hopes to test 60,000 wild birds and 300,0000 domestic birds as part of it's bird flu surveillance program
Revised:  The EU also hopes to test 60,000 wild birds and 300,0000 domestic birds as part of its bird flu surveillance program
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Original:  The EU also hopes to test 60,000 wild birds and 300,0000 domestic birds as part of its bird flu surveillance program  
Revised:  The EU also hopes to test 60,000 wild birds and 300,0000 domestic birds as part of its bird flu surveillance program . 
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Original: In France, gouvernment asks to keep domesticated fowl indoors on all the territory.
Revised: In France, the government asks citizens to keep domesticated fowl indoors on all the territory.
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Original:  Domesticated ducks 'll receive vaccine
Revised:  Domesticated ducks will receive vaccine
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Original:  The virus has been found in migaratory birds much earlier than had been expected.
Revised:  The virus has been found in migratory birds much earlier than had been expected.
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Original:  Globally, 91 people have died after contracting the virus from close contact with diseased birds, but the greatest concern for European authorities is that an outbreak will occur among domesticated fowl, destroying local poulty industries.
Revised:  Globally, 91 people have died after contracting the virus from close contact with diseased birds, but the greatest concern for European authorities is that an outbreak will occur among domesticated fowl, destroying local poultry industries.
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Original:  A single outbreak can kill tens of thousands of birds, and forces all of the birds in a wide region to be culled to prevent the spread of the disease.
Revised:  A single outbreak can kill tens of thousands of birds, and all birds must be culled across a wide region to be culled to prevent the spread of the disease.
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Original:  A single outbreak can kill tens of thousands of birds, and forces all of the birds in a wide region to be culled to prevent the spread of the disease.
Revised:  A single outbreak can kill tens of thousands of birds, and forces all of the birds in a wide region to prevent the spread of the disease.
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Original:  In France, the government asks citizens to keep domesticated fowl indoors on all property .
Revised:  In France, the government asks citizens to keep domesticated fowl indoors throughout the country .
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Original:  Domesticated ducks will receive a vaccine
Revised:  Domesticated ducks will be vaccinated
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Original:  Iran had stopped the enrichment prosecc nearly 2 1/2 years ago  
Revised:  Iran had stopped the enrichment prosecc nearly 2 1/2 years ago . 
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Original:  Suspend all nuclear activity and the enrichment of uranium and the conversion of uranium, " and " they are not listening to us  ."
Revised:  Suspend all nuclear activity and the enrichment of uranium and the conversion of uranium, but they are not listening to us ."
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Original: Foreign Minister Philippe Douste-Blazy  of France went on French TV and accused Iran of having a "clandestine" nuclear program saying, "no civilian nuclear program can explain the Iranian nuclear program.
Revised: Foreign Minister Philippe Douste-Blazy went of France went on French TV and accused Iran of having a "clandestine" nuclear program saying, "no civilian nuclear program can explain the Iranian nuclear program.
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Original:  However, on a French radio station, the Iranian chief nuclear negotiator Ali Larijani said, "contrary to all the propaganda against us, we are not seeking a nuclear bomb, since we are a signatory to (the nuclear) Non-Proliferation Treaty (NPT).
Revised:  However, on a French radio station, the Iranian chief nuclear negotiator Ali Larijani said, "contrary to all the propaganda against us, we are not seeking a nuclear bomb, since we are a signatory to (the nuclear) (NPT).
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Original:  Iran had stopped the enrichment process nearly 2 1/2 years ago . "Now it's up to the Security Council to say what it will do, what means it will use to stop, to manage, to halt this terrible crisis of nuclear proliferation caused by Iran," added Douste-Blazy
Revised:  Iran had stopped the enrichment process nearly 2 1/2 years ago "Now it's up to the Security Council to say what it will do, what means it will use to stop, to manage, to halt this terrible crisis of nuclear proliferation caused by Iran," added Douste-Blazy
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Original:  Iran had stopped the enrichment process nearly 2 1/2 years ago . "Now it's up to the Security Council to say what it will do, what means it will use to stop, to manage, to halt this terrible crisis of nuclear proliferation caused by Iran," added Douste-Blazy
Revised:  Iran had stopped the enrichment process nearly 2 1/2 years ago . 
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Original:  According to the UN and New Zealand, it would have relied heavily on New Zealand for assistance even if independence had been gaine
Revised:  According to the UN and New Zealand, would have relied heavily on New Zealand for assistance even if independence had been gaine
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Original:  Tokelau, a 12 square-kilometer archipelago with a population of 1,500  consists of three islands that do not have roads, an airport or a capital.
Revised:  Tokelau, a 12 square-kilometre archipelago with a population of 1,500 consists of three islands that do not have roads, an airport or a capital.
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Original:  Tokelau, a 12 square-kilometer archipelago with a population of 1,500  consists of three islands that do not have roads, an airport or a capital.
Revised:  Tokelau, a 12 square-kilometer archipelago with a population of 1,500 , consists of three islands that do not have roads, an airport or a capital.
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Original:  According to the UN and New Zealand,  would have relied heavily on New Zealand for assistance even if independence had been gaine
Revised:  According to the UN and New Zealand, would have relied heavily on New Zealand for assistance even if independence had been gained
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Original:   According to the UN and New Zealand, Tokelau would have relied heavily on New Zealand for  assistance even if independence had been gained
Revised:  According to the UN and New Zealand, Tokelau would have relied heavily on New Zealand for assistance even if independence had been chosen
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Original: Researchers in Britain have discovered that genetically modified crops can benefit wildlife.
Revised: Researchers in Britain have claimed that genetically modified crops can benefit wildlife.
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Original:  It is hoped that these cost benefits and the high crop yields will lead to farmer's acceptance of these approaches if the beet is authorised for widespread planting   .
Revised:  It is hoped that these cost benefits and the high crop yields will lead to farmer's acceptance of these approaches if the beet is authorised for widespread planting . .
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Original: Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra In a move that has been greeted with dismay by some groups, Thailand's Constitutional Court has rejected a petition submitted by 28 of the country's senators.
Revised:  In a move that has been greeted with dismay by some groups, Thailand's Constitutional Court has rejected a petition submitted by 28 of the country's senators.
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Original: This is not the first time that Thailand's beleagured PM has faced judgement from the court, nor may it be the last.
Revised: This is not the first time that Thailand's beleaguered PM has faced judgement from the court, nor may it be the last.
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Original:  I learned a lot from him 
Revised:  I learned a lot from him .
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Original:  Sanders is also the first professional athlete to win a World Series and Super Bowl in his pro career.
Revised:  Sanders is the first professional athlete to win a World Series and Super Bowl in his pro career.
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Original:  Reports show that Sanders may go back into news broadcasting, most likely on the FOX NFL Pre-Game Show.
Revised:  Reports show that Sanders may go back into news broadcasting, possibly on the FOX NFL Pre-Game Show.
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Original:  Under IOC rules, Olympians that test positive for a banned substance are considered guilty regardless of circumstances  
Revised:  Under IOC rules, Olympians that test positive for a banned substance are considered guilty regardless of circumstances . 
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Original:  ITAR-TASS News Agency reports that Pyleva tested positive for Cordedon , a stimulant banned by the World Anti Doping Agency (WADA).
Revised:  ITAR-TASS News Agency reports that Pyleva tested positive for cordedon , a stimulant banned by the World Anti Doping Agency (WADA).
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Original:  ITAR-TASS News Agency reports that Pyleva tested positive for Cordedon , a stimulant banned by the World Anti Doping Agency (WADA).
Revised:  ITAR-TASS News Agency reports that Pyleva tested positive for Cordedon , a stimulant banned by the World Anti-Doping Agency (WADA).
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Original: The report recommends that the United States bring the detainees to trial "in accordance ith criminal procedure" or "release them without further delay", and that "The United States Government should close the Guantánamo Bay detention facilities without further delay."
Revised: The report recommends that the United States bring the detainees to trial "in accordance with criminal procedure" or "release them without further delay", and that "The United States Government should close the Guantánamo Bay detention facilities without further delay."
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Original:  He adds that the United States explicitely barred the UN inspetors from talking to detainees, without which proper investigations are impossible.
Revised:  He adds that the United States explicitedly barred the UN inspetors from talking to detainees, without which proper investigations are impossible.
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Original:  He adds that the United States explicitely barred the UN inspetors from talking to detainees, without which proper investigations are impossible.
Revised:  He adds that the United States explicitely barred the UN inspectors from talking to detainees, without which proper investigations are impossible.
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Original:  He pointed out that this "is also the position of the United States when it concerns other contries , like China".
Revised:  He pointed out that this "is also the position of the United States when it concerns other countries , like China".
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Original:  He adds that the United States explicitedly barred the UN inspectors from talking to detainees, without which proper investigations are impossible.
Revised:  He adds that the United States explicitly barred the UN inspectors from talking to detainees, without which proper investigations are impossible.
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