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Original:  The announcement to parliament was also broadcast on television . " We  express our condolences for their martyrdom.
Revised:  The announcement to parliament was also broadcast on television . " We e express our condolences for their martyrdom.
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Original:  A statement on state television by the Revolutionary Guards claimed "foreign involvement", "[s]urely foreign elements, particularly those linked to the global arrogance, were involved in this attack."
Revised:  A Revolutionary Guards statement on TV claimed "foreign involvement", "[s]urely foreign elements, particularly those linked to the global arrogance, were involved in this attack."
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Original:  Some of the them are strongly opposed to the mainly Shiite Iranian government and oppose Shia rule.
Revised:  Some are strongly opposed to the mainly Shiite Iranian government and oppose Shia rule.
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Original:  According to the Irna state news agency, Rajab Ali Mohammadzadeh, the Guard's chief provincial commander, also died in the attack.
Revised:  According to the IRNA state news agency, Rajab Ali Mohammadzadeh, the Guard's chief provincial commander, also died in the attack.
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Original:  According to the IRNA state news agency, Rajab Ali Mohammadzadeh, the Guard's chief provincial commander, also died in the attack.
Revised:  According to IRNA, the state news agency, Rajab Ali Mohammadzadeh, the Guard's chief provincial commander, also died in the attack.
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Original: Iran's state-sponsored Fars news agency report at least twenty killed, including senior members of the Revolutionary Guards, and another forty wounded, by a suicide bombing in Pishin, a city in the country's south-eastern Sistan-Baluchistan province.
Revised: Iran's state-sponsored Fars news agency reports at least twenty killed, including senior members of the Revolutionary Guards, and another forty wounded, by a suicide bombing in Pishin, a city in the country's south-eastern Sistan-Baluchistan province.
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Original: Iran's state-sponsored Fars news agency reports at least twenty killed, including senior members of the Revolutionary Guards, and another forty wounded, by a suicide bombing in Pishin, a city in the country's south-eastern Sistan-Baluchistan province.
Revised: Iran's state-sponsored Fars news agency report at least twenty killed, including senior members of the Revolutionary Guards, and another forty wounded, by a suicide bombing in Pishin, a city in the country's south-eastern Sistan-Baluchistan province.
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Original: Iran's state-sponsored Fars news agency report at least twenty killed, including senior members of the Revolutionary Guards , and another forty wounded, by a suicide bombing in Pishin, a city in the country's south-eastern Sistan-Baluchistan province.
Revised: Iran's state-sponsored Fars news agency report at least twenty killed, including senior members of the Revolutionary Guard , and another forty wounded, by a suicide bombing in Pishin, a city in the country's south-eastern Sistan-Baluchistan province.
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Original:  A Revolutionary Guards statement on TV claimed "foreign involvement" , "[s]urely foreign elements, particularly those linked to the global arrogance, were involved in this attack."
Revised:  A Revolutionary Guard statement on TV claimed "foreign involvement" , "[s]urely foreign elements, particularly those linked to the global arrogance, were involved in this attack."
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Original:  A Revolutionary Guards statement on TV claimed "foreign involvement" , "[s]urely foreign elements, particularly those linked to the global arrogance, were involved in this attack."
Revised:  A Revolutionary Guards statement on TV claimed "foreign involvement" ; "[s]urely foreign elements, particularly those linked to the global arrogance, were involved in this attack."
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Original:  Some are strongly opposed to the mainly Shiite Iranian government and oppose Shia rule.
Revised:  Some are strongly opposed to the mainly Shiite Iranian government and Shia rule.
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Original:  In the past  Iran has accused the Jundallah (Soldiers of God) of carrying out terrorist activities in the province, which borders Afghanistan and Pakistan , although no clearly identified group claims responsibility for such
Revised:  In the past , Iran has accused the Jundallah (Soldiers of God) of carrying out terrorist activities in the province, which borders Afghanistan and Pakistan , although no clearly identified group claims responsibility for such
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Original:  In the past  Iran has accused the Jundallah (Soldiers of God) of carrying out terrorist activities in the province, which borders Afghanistan and Pakistan , although no clearly identified group claims responsibility for such
Revised:  In the past Iran has accused the Jundallah (Soldiers of God) of carrying out terrorist activities in the province, which borders Afghanistan and Pakistan . Although, no clearly identified group claims responsibility for such
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Original:  "Lives should not be for sale or for rent on a continent that prohibits slavery and forced labour, and prides itself on upholding human dignity", said Costa  
Revised:  "Lives should not be for sale or for rent on a continent that prohibits slavery and forced labour, and prides itself on upholding human dignity", said Costa . 
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Original: Today's announcement aims to bring awareness to the victims' plights, forced to work illegally  after being smuggled into the EU . Antonio Maria Costa, UNODC executive director, pointed out that few human traffickers are caught, aimed police for not acting sufficiently.
Revised: Today's announcement aims to bring awareness to the victims' plights, forced to work illegally after being smuggled across borders . Antonio Maria Costa, UNODC executive director, pointed out that few human traffickers are caught, aimed police for not acting sufficiently.
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Original: Today's announcement aims to bring awareness to the victims' plights, forced to work illegally  after being smuggled into the EU . Antonio Maria Costa, UNODC executive director, pointed out that few human traffickers are caught, aimed police for not acting sufficiently.
Revised: Today's announcement aims to bring awareness to the victims' plights, forced to work illegally after being smuggled into the EU . Antonio Maria Costa, UNODC executive director, pointed out that few human traffickers are caught, blaming police for not acting sufficiently.
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Original:   Costa highlighted that around one in 100,000 people were convicted for human trafficking in Europe, with only 9,000 victims reported in 2006, and noted that this figure was less than "for rare crimes like kidnapping."
Revised:  Costa highlighted that around one in 100,000 people were convicted for human trafficking in Europe, noting that this figure was less than "for rare crimes like kidnapping."
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Original:   "Perhaps police are not finding the traffickers and victims because they are not looking for them," he questioned . UNODC asserts the majority of victims are women, forced into prostitution;
Revised:  "Perhaps police are not finding the traffickers and victims because they are not looking for them," he said . UNODC asserts the majority of victims are women, forced into prostitution;
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Original:  "Lives should not be for sale or for rent on a continent that prohibits slavery and forced labour, and prides itself on upholding human dignity ",said Costa.
Revised:  "Lives should not be for sale or for rent on a continent that prohibits slavery and forced labour, and prides itself on upholding human dignity 
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Original: Today's announcement aims to bring awareness to the victims' plights, forced to work illegally in prostitution or labour jobs after being smuggled across borders.
Revised: Today's announcement aims to bring awareness to the plight of victims, often forced to work illegally in prostitution or labour jobs after being smuggled across borders.
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Original:  Antonio Maria Costa, UNODC executive director, pointed out that few human traffickers are caught, blaming police for not acting sufficiently.
Revised:  Antonio Maria Costa, UNODC executive director, highlighted that few human traffickers are caught, blaming police for not acting sufficiently.
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Original:  In the six years since the Protocol to Prevent, Suppress and Punish Trafficking in Persons, Especially Women and Children , came into force, the majority of EU countries had taken measures to criminalise trafficking both for sexual exploitation and forced labour.
Revised:  In the six years since the Protocol to Prevent, Suppress and Punish Trafficking in Persons, Especially Women and Children came into force, the majority of EU countries had taken measures to criminalise trafficking both for sexual exploitation and forced labour.
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Original:  In the six years since the Protocol to Prevent, Suppress and Punish Trafficking in Persons, Especially Women and Children , came into force, the majority of EU countries had taken measures to criminalise trafficking both for sexual exploitation and forced labour.
Revised:  In the six years since the Protocol to Prevent, Suppress and Punish Trafficking in Persons, Especially Women and Children , came into force, the majority of EU countries have taken measures to criminalise trafficking both for sexual exploitation and forced labour.
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Original:  "Lives should not be for sale or for rent on a continent that prohibits slavery and forced labour, and prides itself on upholding human dignity,"   said Costa
Revised:  "Lives should not be for sale or for rent on a continent that prohibits slavery and forced labour, and prides itself on upholding human dignity," said Costa. said Costa
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Original:  Taking advantage of European Anti-Trafficking Day, they are calling for greater efforts to combat this illegal trade.
Revised:  Taking advantage of European Anti-Trafficking Day, they are calling for greater efforts to combat the illegal trade.
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Original:  There were only 9,000 victims  reported in 2006.
Revised:  Only 9,000 victims reported in 2006.
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Original:  There were only 9,000 victims  reported in 2006.
Revised:  There were only 9,000 victims were reported in 2006.
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Original:  "Perhaps police are not finding the traffickers and victims because they are not looking for them," he said . UNODC asserts the majority of victims are women, forced into prostitution;
Revised:  "Perhaps police are not finding the traffickers and victims because they are not looking for them," said Costa . UNODC asserts the majority of victims are women, forced into prostitution;
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Original:  "Lives should not be for sale or for rent on a continent that prohibits slavery and forced labour, and prides itself on upholding human dignity", said Costa
Revised:  "Lives should not be for sale or for rent on a continent that prohibits slavery and forced labour, and prides itself on upholding human dignity", Costa asserts
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Original: Hurricane Rick in the Eastern Pacific became an extremely powerful and dangerous Category 5 hurricane on Saturday, the first in the region since 2002's Hurricane Kenna.
Revised: Hurricane Rick in the Eastern Pacific became an extremely powerful Category 5 hurricane on Saturday, the first in the region since 2002's Hurricane Kenna.
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Original:  Forecasters say Rick will eventually take a turn towards the northeast, bringing it towards the southern Baja California Peninsula   
Revised:  Forecasters say Rick will eventually take a turn towards the northeast, bringing it towards the southern Baja California Peninsula of Mexico. 
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Original:  "Rick is probably going to go into the record books as one of the most rapidly intensifying hurricanes," said Hugh Cobb, a National Hurricane Center forecaster  
Revised:  "Rick is probably going to go into the record books as one of the most rapidly intensifying hurricanes," said Hugh Cobb, a National Hurricane Center forecaster . 
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Original:  It is the 17th named storm of the 2009 Pacific hurricane season
Revised:  Rick is the 17th named storm of the 2009 Pacific hurricane season
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Original: The storm is currently situated about 500 mi south-southeast of Cabo San Lucas, and is moving west-northwestward.
Revised: The storm is currently situated about 500 miles south-southeast of Cabo San Lucas, and is moving west-northwestward.
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Original:  Officials are advising residents throughout the region to keep a close eye on Rick 's progress over  coming days.
Revised:  Officials advise residents throughout the region to keep a close eye on Rick 's progress over coming days.
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Original:  Officials are advising residents throughout the region to keep a close eye on Rick 's progress over  coming days.
Revised:  Officials are advising residents throughout the region to keep a close eye on the storm 's progress over coming days.
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Original:  Officials are advising residents throughout the region to keep a close eye on Rick 's progress over  coming days.
Revised:  Officials are advising residents throughout the region to keep a close eye on Rick 's progress over the coming days.
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Original:  Rick is the 17th named storm of the 2009 Pacific hurricane season
Revised:  Rick is the seventeenth named storm of the 2009 Pacific hurricane season
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Original:  Forecasters say Rick will eventually take a turn towards the northeast, bringing it towards the southern Baja California Peninsula of Mexico.
Revised:  Forecasters say Rick will eventually take a turn towards the northeast, bringing it towards the southern of Mexico.
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Original:  "Rick is probably going to go into the record books as one of the most rapidly intensifying hurricanes," said Hugh Cobb, a National Hurricane Center forecaster.
Revised:  "Rick is probably going to go into the record books as one of the most rapidly intensifying hurricanes," said Hugh Cobb, a forecaster.
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Original:  The IOC meets later today to discuss the new Olympic Program  
Revised:  The IOC meets later today to discuss the new Olympic Program . 
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Original: The International Olympic Committee has annouced today that Baseball and Softball are to be cut from Olympic competition from 2012.
Revised: The International Olympic Committee has annouced today that baseball and softball are to be cut from Olympic competition from 2012.
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Original:  Rugby, Karate, Rollersports, Golf, and Squash have been rumored to be included.
Revised:  Rugby, karate, rollersports, golf, and squash have been rumored to be included.
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Original:  The vote, held in Singapore, surprised some supporters of the sports, who believed that there were enough votes to retain the them
Revised:  The vote, held in Singapore, surprised some supporters of the sports, who believed that there were enough votes to retain them
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Original: The Philippines has stockpiled emergency supplies and put rescue teams on a standby in preparation against Tyhpoon Lupit, which is expected to hit the country by Wednesday.
Revised: The Philippines has stockpiled emergency supplies and put rescue teams on a standby in preparation against Typhoon Lupit, which is expected to hit the country by Wednesday.
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Original:  It comes only a few weeks after two other typhoons, which killed almost a thousand people and displaced millions.
Revised:  It comes only weeks after several other typhoons, which killed almost a thousand people and displaced millions.
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Original:  The government weather service announced that the outer areas of the storm could afecct Luzon, the country's main island, and have winds up to 175 kilometres per hour.
Revised:  The government weather service announced that the outer areas of the storm could affect Luzon, the country's main island, and have winds up to 175 kilometres per hour.
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Original:  The website was created in September by a man from Florida named Isaac Eiland-Hall  , and it asserts Beck uses questionable tactics "to spread lies and misinformation".
Revised:  Florida resident Isaac Eiland-Hall , and it asserts Beck uses questionable tactics "to spread lies and misinformation".
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Original: In your response brief in the Beck v. Eiland-Hall case, you wrote : "Mr. Beck has all but begged to become the subject of a meme."
Revised: In your response brief in the Beck v. Eiland-Hall case, you wrote , "Mr. Beck has all but begged to become the subject of a meme."
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Original:  You wrote in the conclusion to the Eiland-Hall response brief : "there can be only one purpose to filing this complaint: as an attempt to silence a critic because he doesn't like being criticized."
Revised:  You wrote in the conclusion to the Eiland-Hall response brief , "there can be only one purpose to filing this complaint: as an attempt to silence a critic because he doesn't like being criticized."
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Original:  [[File:Glenn Beck Book Tour cropped.jpg|Glenn Beck in 2009 ]] The joke was first applied to Beck on the Internet discussion community Fark , Then became popular on several social media sites.
Revised:  [[File:Glenn Beck Book Tour cropped.jpg|Glenn Beck in 2009 ]] Users of the Internet discussion community Fark , Then became popular on several social media sites.
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Original: In the response filed on behalf of Eiland-Hall , Randazza argues that Beck is using the process of the WIPO court to infringe the free speech rights of his client;
Revised: Randazza argues in the response filed on behalf of Eiland-Hall , Randazza argues that Beck is using the process of the WIPO court to infringe the free speech rights of his client;
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Original: In the response filed on behalf of Eiland-Hall , Randazza argues that Beck is using the process of the WIPO court to infringe the free speech rights of his client;
Revised: In the response filed on behalf of Eiland-Hall that Beck is using the process of the WIPO court to infringe the free speech rights of his client;
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Original:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL who were kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday  are "in good health," according to  Sudan's state Minister for Humanitarian Affairs , Abdel Baqi al-Jailani .
Revised:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL , kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday are "in good health," according to Sudan's state Minister for Humanitarian Affairs , Abdel Baqi al-Jailani .
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Original:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL who were kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday  are "in good health," according to  Sudan's state Minister for Humanitarian Affairs , Abdel Baqi al-Jailani .
Revised:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL who were kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday , and are "in good health," according to Sudan's state Minister for Humanitarian Affairs , Abdel Baqi al-Jailani .
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Original:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL who were kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday  are "in good health," according to  Sudan's state Minister for Humanitarian Affairs , Abdel Baqi al-Jailani .
Revised:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL who were kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday are "in good health," according to Abdel Baqi al-Jailani Sudan's state Minister for Humanitarian Affairs , Abdel Baqi al-Jailani .
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Original:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL who were kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday  are "in good health," according to  Sudan's state Minister for Humanitarian Affairs , Abdel Baqi al-Jailani .
Revised:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL who were kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday are "in good health," according to Sudan's Minister for Humanitarian Affairs , Abdel Baqi al-Jailani .
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Original:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL who were kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday  are "in good health," according to  Sudan's state Minister for Humanitarian Affairs , Abdel Baqi al-Jailani .
Revised:  190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL who were kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region in July were freed on Sunday are "in good health," according to Sudan's state Minister for Humanitarian Affairs .
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Original: __NOTOC__ 190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL, kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region last July  were freed on Sunday, and are "in good health," according to Abdel Baqi al-Jailani Sudan's Minister for Humanitarian Affairs.
Revised: __NOTOC__ 190px|The western region of Darfur Two members of Irish aid agency GOAL, kidnapped in Sudan's Darfur region last July , were freed on Sunday, and are "in good health," according to Abdel Baqi al-Jailani Sudan's Minister for Humanitarian Affairs.
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Original:  Sharon Commins and Hilda Kawuki said that they are "thrilled" to be free at last.
Revised:  Sharon Commins and Hilda Kawuki say they are "thrilled" to be free at last.
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Original: Irish citizen Sharon Commins, 32, and her Ugandan colleague Hilda Kawuki, 42, were working for the Irish charity GOAL in a compound run by the charity in the North Darfur town of Kutum.
Revised: Irish citizen Commins, 32, and her Ugandan colleague Hilda Kawuki, 42, were working for the Irish charity GOAL in a compound run by the charity in the North Darfur town of Kutum.
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Original: Irish citizen Sharon Commins, 32, and her Ugandan colleague Hilda Kawuki, 42, were working for the Irish charity GOAL in a compound run by the charity in the North Darfur town of Kutum.
Revised: Irish citizen Sharon Commins, 32, and her Ugandan colleague Hilda Kawuki, 42, were working for GOAL in a compound run by the charity in the North Darfur town of Kutum.
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Original:  Armed men seized them on July 3. After their release early Sunday morning they described their captivity as a "difficult time", and thanked everyone who had worked to secure their freedom in a joint statement released through the GOAL charity .
Revised:  Armed men seized them on July 3. Following their release early Sunday morning they described their captivity as a "difficult time", and thanked everyone who had worked to secure their freedom in a joint statement released through the GOAL charity .
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Original:  Armed men seized them on July 3. After their release early Sunday morning they described their captivity as a "difficult time", and thanked everyone who had worked to secure their freedom in a joint statement released through the GOAL charity .
Revised:  Armed men seized them on July 3. After their release early Sunday morning they described their captivity as a "difficult time", and thanked everyone who had worked to secure their freedom in a joint statement released through the GOAL .
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Original:  They were  "naturally thrilled to be released after such a long period in captivity".
Revised:  They were , "naturally thrilled to be released after such a long period in captivity".
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