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Original:  After that , Hu became a powerful leader in South China, holding three political principles of resistance: resistance against Japanese invasion, resistance against warlords, and finally resistance against the self-proclaimed leader Chiang Kai-shek.
Revised:  After that , Hu became a powerful leader in South China, holding three political principles of resistance: resistance against Japanese invasion, resistance against warlords, and resistance against the self-proclaimed leader Chiang Kai-shek.
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Original:  Hu was an advocate of action against Japanese aggression , criticizing Chiang Kai-shek for "his spineless failure to adopt a strong policy towards the foreign power which has torn and ravaged our homeland!"
Revised:  Hu was an advocate of action against Japanese aggression and criticized Chiang Kai-shek for "his spineless failure to adopt a strong policy towards the foreign power which has torn and ravaged our homeland!"
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Original:  Hu visited Europe and stopped his political attack on Chiang Kai-shek in June , 1935.
Revised:  Hu visited Europe and stopped his political attack on Chiang in June 1935.
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Original:  In the first session of the fifth conference of Kuomintang in December 1935, he was absently elected as the Chair of Central Committee of Common Affairs .
Revised:  In the first session of the fifth conference of Kuomintang in December 1935, he was elected as the Chair of Central Committee of Common Affairs .
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Original:  In the first session of the fifth conference of Kuomintang in December 1935, he was absently elected as the Chair of Central Committee of Common Affairs .
Revised:  In the first session of the fifth conference of Kuomintang in December 1935, he was absently elected as the Chair of Central Committee of Common Affairs in his absence.
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Original:   Hu returned to China in January , 1936 , and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
Revised:  Hu returned to China in January 1936 , and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
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Original:   Hu returned to China in January , 1936 , and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
Revised:  Hu returned to China in January , 1936 and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
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Original:  Chiang wanted to replace Hu with loyal followers in southern China and end the autonomy the south enjoyed under Hu.
Revised:  Chiang wanted to replace Hu with loyal followers in southern China and to end its autonomy that it had enjoyed under Hu.
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Original:  As a result, Chen and the New Guangxi clique conspired to remove Chiang from office.
Revised:  LAs a result, Chen and the New Guangxi clique conspired to remove Chiang from office.
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Original:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident ", Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect  and the conspiracy collapsed.
Revised:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident ," Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect and the conspiracy collapsed.
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Original:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident ", Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect  and the conspiracy collapsed.
Revised:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident ", Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect , and the conspiracy collapsed.
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Original:  Hu's political philosophy was that one's individual rights are a function of one's membership in a nation.
Revised:  Hu's political philosophy was that individual rights are a function of one's membership in a nation.
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Original:  His father had moved to Panyu, Guangdong , to take up an official post.
Revised:  His father had moved to Panyu, Guangdong to take up an official post.
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Original:  Political career Hu was elected to be a central executive committee member in the first conference of the Kuomintang in January  1924.
Revised:  Hu was elected to be a central executive committee member in the first conference of the Kuomintang in January 1924.
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Original:  Political career Hu was elected to be a central executive committee member in the first conference of the Kuomintang in January  1924.
Revised:  Political career Hu was elected to be a central executive committee member in the first conference of the Kuomintang in January , 1924.
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Original:  In September, he acted as vice generalissimo  when Sun Yat-sen left Guangzhou to Shaoguan.
Revised:  In September, he acted as vice generalissimo , when Sun Yat-sen left Guangzhou to Shaoguan.
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Original:  Then , Hu became a powerful leader in South China, holding three political principles of resistance: resistance against Japanese invasion, resistance against warlords, and  resistance against the self-proclaimed leader Chiang Kai-shek.
Revised:  After that , Hu became a powerful leader in South China, holding three political principles of resistance: resistance against Japanese invasion, resistance against warlords, and resistance against the self-proclaimed leader Chiang Kai-shek.
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Original:  Then , Hu became a powerful leader in South China, holding three political principles of resistance: resistance against Japanese invasion, resistance against warlords, and  resistance against the self-proclaimed leader Chiang Kai-shek.
Revised:  Then , Hu became a powerful leader in South China, holding three political principles of resistance: resistance against Japanese invasion, resistance against warlords, and finally resistance against the self-proclaimed leader Chiang Kai-shek.
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Original:  Hu continued to rule southern China, the heartland of the KMT, with the help of Chen Jitang and the New Guangxi clique , where he attempted to create a model government free of corruption and cronyism to discredit Chiang's Nanjing regime.
Revised:  Hu continued to rule southern China, the heartland of the KMT, with the help of Chen Jitang and the New Guangxi clique . There he attempted to create a model government free of corruption and cronyism to discredit Chiang's Nanjing regime.
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Original:  Hu was an advocate of action against Japanese aggression and criticized Chiang Kai-shek for "his spineless failure to adopt a strong policy towards the foreign power which has torn and ravaged our homeland!"
Revised:  Hu was an advocate of action against Japanese aggression , criticizing Chiang Kai-shek for "his spineless failure to adopt a strong policy towards the foreign power which has torn and ravaged our homeland!"
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Original:  Hu visited Europe and stopped his political attack on Chiang in June 1935.
Revised:  Hu visited Europe and stopped his political attack on Chiang Kai-shek in June, 1935.
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Original:  In the first session of the fifth conference of Kuomintang in December 1935, he was  elected as the Chair of Central Committee of Common Affairs in his absence.
Revised:  In the first session of the fifth conference of Kuomintang in December 1935, he was elected as the Chair of Central Committee of Common Affairs 
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Original:  Death and legacy Hu returned to China in January  1936  and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
Revised:  . Hu returned to China in January 1936 and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
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Original:  Death and legacy Hu returned to China in January  1936  and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
Revised:  Death and legacy Hu returned to China in January , 1936 and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
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Original:  Death and legacy Hu returned to China in January  1936  and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
Revised:  Death and legacy Hu returned to China in January 1936 , and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12, 1936.
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Original:  Chiang wanted to replace Hu with loyal followers in southern China and to end its autonomy that it had enjoyed under Hu.
Revised:  Chiang wanted to replace Hu with loyal followers in southern China and end the autonomy the south enjoyed under Hu.
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Original:  LAs a result, Chen and the New Guangxi clique conspired to remove Chiang from office.
Revised:  As a result, Chen and the New Guangxi clique conspired to remove Chiang from office.
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Original:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident , "  Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect , and the conspiracy collapsed.
Revised:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident " Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect , and the conspiracy collapsed.
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Original:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident , "  Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect , and the conspiracy collapsed.
Revised:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident , " , Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect , and the conspiracy collapsed.
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Original:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident , "  Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect , and the conspiracy collapsed.
Revised:  In the so-called "Liangguang Incident , " Chen was forced to resign as governor of Guangdong after Chiang bribed many of Chen's officers to defect and the conspiracy collapsed.
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Original:  Hu's political philosophy was that  individual rights are a function of one's membership in a nation.
Revised:  Hu's political philosophy was that one's individual rights are a function of one's membership in a nation.
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Original:  born in Panyu, Guangdong, Qing dynasty, China, December 9 , 1879 – Guangdong, Republic of China, May 12 , 1936) was one of the early conservative right factional leaders in the Kuomintang (KMT) during revolutionary China.
Revised:  born in Panyu, Guangdong, Qing dynasty, China, 9 , 1879 – Guangdong, Republic of China, May 12 , 1936) was one of the early conservative right factional leaders in the Kuomintang (KMT) during revolutionary China.
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Original:  born in Panyu, Guangdong, Qing dynasty, China, December 9 , 1879 – Guangdong, Republic of China, May 12 , 1936) was one of the early conservative right factional leaders in the Kuomintang (KMT) during revolutionary China.
Revised:  born in Panyu, Guangdong, Qing dynasty, China, December 9 , 1879 – Guangdong, Republic of China, 12 , 1936) was one of the early conservative right factional leaders in the Kuomintang (KMT) during revolutionary China.
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Original:  Hu was elected to be a central executive committee member in the first conference of the Kuomintang in January , 1924.
Revised:  Hu was elected to be a central executive committee member in the first conference of the Kuomintang in January 1924.
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Original:  Later on February 28 , 1931, Hu was placed under house arrest by Chiang because of disputes over the new provisional constitution.
Revised:  Later on 28 , 1931, Hu was placed under house arrest by Chiang because of disputes over the new provisional constitution.
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Original:  Hu visited Europe and stopped his political attack on Chiang Kai-shek in June , 1935.
Revised:  Hu visited Europe and stopped his political attack on Chiang Kai-shek in June 1935.
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Original:  Hu returned to China in January , 1936, and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12 , 1936.
Revised:  Hu returned to China in January 1936, and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12 , 1936.
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Original:  Hu returned to China in January , 1936, and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on May 12 , 1936.
Revised:  Hu returned to China in January , 1936, and lived in Guangzhou until he died of cerebral hemorrhage on 12 , 1936.
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Original:  Category:Chinese revolutionaries Category:1879 births Category:1936 deaths Category: Presidents of the Legislative Yuan Category:People from Panyu District Category:People of the 1911 Revolution Category:Politicians from Guangzhou Category: Tongmenghui members Category:Members of the Kuomintang Category:Comintern people Category:Hakka politicians Category:Deaths by intracerebral hemorrha
Revised:  Category:Chinese revolutionaries Category:1879 births Category:1936 deaths Category: Comintern people Category:Deaths by intracerebral hemorrhage Category:Hakka politicians Category:Members of the Kuomintang Category:People from Panyu District Category:People of the 1911 Revolution Category:Politicians from Guangzhou Category: Tongmenghui members Category:Members of the Kuomintang Category:Comintern people Category:Hakka politicians Category:Deaths by intracerebral hemorrha
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Original:  Category:Chinese revolutionaries Category:1879 births Category:1936 deaths Category: Presidents of the Legislative Yuan Category:People from Panyu District Category:People of the 1911 Revolution Category:Politicians from Guangzhou Category: Tongmenghui members Category:Members of the Kuomintang Category:Comintern people Category:Hakka politicians Category:Deaths by intracerebral hemorrha
Revised:  Category:Chinese revolutionaries Category:1879 births Category:1936 deaths Category: Presidents of the Legislative Yuan Category:People from Panyu District Category:People of the 1911 Revolution Category:Politicians from Guangzhou Category: Presidents of the Legislative Yuan Category:Tongmenghui membe
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Original:  This can include less than 1 mm to several mm of the water column       
Revised:  This can include less than 1 mm to several mm of the water column . 
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Original:  This can include less than 1 mm to several mm of the water column       
Revised:  This can include less than 1 mm to several mm of the water column Biological processes Bioturbation mixes sediments and changes the topography of the sediment-water interface, as shown by time lapse photogrpahy of lugworms moving through sediment. Interactions between sediments and organisms living within sediments can also alter the fluxes of oxygen and other dissolved components in and out of the sediment-water interface. Animals like worms, mollusks and echinoderms can enhance resuspension and mixing through movement and construction of burrows. Microorganisms such as benthic algae can stabilize sediments and keep the sediment-water interface in a more stable condition by building mats. These microalgal mats' stabilizing effect is in part due to the stickiness of the exopolymeric substances (EPS) or biochemical "glue" that they secrete. 
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Original:  Biological processes Bioturbation mixes sediments and changes the topography of the sediment-water interface, as shown by time lapse photography of lugworms moving through sediment.
Revised:  Biological processes 
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Original:  Chemical Processes There are several chemical processes that happen abiotically (chemical reactions), as well as biotically (microbial or enzyme mediated reactions).
Revised:  Chemical processes There are several chemical processes that happen abiotically (chemical reactions), as well as biotically (microbial or enzyme mediated reactions).
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Original:  The availability of a variety of lake contaminants is determined by which reactions are taking place within the freshwater system . 316x316px|The sulfur cycle is a great example of lake nutrient cycling that occurs via biologically mediated processes as well as chemical redox reactions .
Revised:  The availability of a variety of lake contaminants is determined by which reactions are taking place within the freshwater system .
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Original: An experimental setting that enables us to study haptic perception in a wide range of complex three-dimensional environments is the Modular Haptic Stimulus Board (MHSB) . One version of MHSB is a planar combination of 3×3 cm wooden bricks with 3D elementary shapes carved on top.
Revised: An experimental setting that enables us to study haptic perception and exploration of a wide range of complex three-dimensional environments is the Modular Haptic Stimulus Board (MHSB) . One version of MHSB is a planar combination of 3×3 cm wooden bricks with 3D elementary shapes carved on top.
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Original:  Anatomy of the human ear. (The length of the auditory canal is exaggerated in this image).
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Original:   References
Revised:  The multifocal technique was developed in the early 1990s in the laboratory of Erich Sutter at the Smith-Kettlewell Eye Research Institute References
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Original:  I have also offered to resign my seat in parliament not as an admission of guilt of any kind, but in order to make it easier for the ANC and government to function in parliament."
Revised:  I have also offered to resign my seat in parliament not as an admission of guilt of any kind, but to make it easier for the ANC and government to function in parliament."
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Original:  The story of the State v Schabir Shaik and others Business in Africa: Mortgaging a Nation IPO Africa: The State Versus Schabir Shaik News24: MEC to testify in Shaik trial SABC News: Shaik cross-examination enters day three Sunday Times: Cosatu stands by Zuma's right to fair treatment The Herald: Zuma’s jewel village ‘built with bribes’ Mail & Guardian: Scorpions Probe Jacob Zuma AllAfrica.com: Corruption Trial Pressures Mbeki, Facing G8 Summit, to Fire Deputy SABC News: Friday -
Revised:  The story of the State v Schabir Shaik and others Business in Africa: Mortgaging a Nation IPO Africa: The State Versus Schabir Shaik News24: MEC to testify in Shaik trial SABC News: Shaik cross-examination enters day three Sunday Times: Cosatu stands by Zuma's right to fair treatment The Herald: Zuma’s jewel village ‘built with bribes’ Mail & Guardian: Scorpions Probe Jacob Zuma AllAfrica.com: Corruption Trial Pressures Mbeki, Facing G8 Summit, to Fire Deputy SABC News: Friday –
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Original:  29 October 2004 - Open ended loans The Star: How he was found guilty - Part five News24: Full transcript of Shaik judgment News24: Shaik hints at French witness World Socialist Web Site: Arms corruption scandal erupts in South Africa SABC News: Highlights of last weeks of 2004 iAfrica: De Lille testifies at Shaik trial BBC News: The rise and fall of Tony Yengeni News24: Schabir Shaik Trial.
Revised:  29 October 2004 – Open ended loans The Star: How he was found guilty - Part five News24: Full transcript of Shaik judgment News24: Shaik hints at French witness World Socialist Web Site: Arms corruption scandal erupts in South Africa SABC News: Highlights of last weeks of 2004 iAfrica: De Lille testifies at Shaik trial BBC News: The rise and fall of Tony Yengeni News24: Schabir Shaik Trial.
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Original:  29 October 2004 - Open ended loans The Star: How he was found guilty - Part five News24: Full transcript of Shaik judgment News24: Shaik hints at French witness World Socialist Web Site: Arms corruption scandal erupts in South Africa SABC News: Highlights of last weeks of 2004 iAfrica: De Lille testifies at Shaik trial BBC News: The rise and fall of Tony Yengeni News24: Schabir Shaik Trial.
Revised:  29 October 2004 - Open ended loans The Star: How he was found guilty – Part five News24: Full transcript of Shaik judgment News24: Shaik hints at French witness World Socialist Web Site: Arms corruption scandal erupts in South Africa SABC News: Highlights of last weeks of 2004 iAfrica: De Lille testifies at Shaik trial BBC News: The rise and fall of Tony Yengeni News24: Schabir Shaik Trial.
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Original:  Accessed 20 September 2005 SABC News: Schabir Shaik Trial.
Revised:  Retrieved 20 September 2005 SABC News: Schabir Shaik Trial.
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Original:  Accessed 21 September 2005
Revised:  Retrieved 21 September 2005
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Original: The Schabir Shaik trial was an important court trials in post-apartheid South Africa.
Revised: The Schabir Shaik trial was an important court trial in post-apartheid South Africa.
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Original:  The case, tried in the Durban and Coast Local Division of the High Court before Judge Hilary Squires, proved the fraudulent and corrupt relationship between Durban-based businessman Schabir Shaik and  South African leader Jacob Zuma.
Revised:  The case, tried in the Durban and Coast Local Division of the High Court before Judge Hilary Squires, proved the fraudulent and corrupt relationship between Durban-based businessman Schabir Shaik and former South African leader Jacob Zuma.
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Original: The International Comics Arts Forum (ICAF), begun in 1995 at Georgetown University by Guy Spielmann and Tristan Fonlladosa, is an annual academic conference distinguished by its international focus and scholarly rigor .
Revised: The International Comic Arts Forum (ICAF), begun in 1995 at Georgetown University by Guy Spielmann and Tristan Fonlladosa, is an annual academic conference distinguished by its international focus and scholarly rigor .
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Original:  Three of the most important peer refereed journals in English are: Journal of Graphic Novels and Comics , Studies in Comics , and European Comic Art .
Revised:  Three of the most important peer refereed journals in English are: Journal of Graphic Novels and Comics Studies in Comics , and European Comic Art .
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Original:  Three of the most important peer refereed journals in English are: Journal of Graphic Novels and Comics , Studies in Comics , and European Comic Art .
Revised:  Three of the most important peer refereed journals in English are: Journal of Graphic Novels and Comics , Studies in Comics European Comic Art .
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Original:  Three of the most important peer refereed journals in English are: Journal of Graphic Novels and Comics , Studies in Comics , and European Comic Art .
Revised:  Three of the most important peer refereed journals in English are: Journal of Graphic Novels and Comics , Studies in Comics , and European Comic Art 
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Original:  Theorists such as  Töpffer, R. C. Harvey, Will Eisner, David Carrier, Alain Rey, and Lawrence Grove emphasize the combination of text and images, though there are prominent examples of pantomime comics throughout its history.
Revised:  Theorists such as Rodolphe Töpffer, R. C. Harvey, Will Eisner, David Carrier, Alain Rey, and Lawrence Grove emphasize the combination of text and images, though there are prominent examples of pantomime comics throughout its history.
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Original:  Some notable examples include: The Ohio State University, URL University of Florida, University of Toronto at Mississauga,Visual Culture Studies - University of Toronto Mississauga. and University of California Santa Cruz,Spiegelman, Art. "Comix 101." Lecture.
Revised:  Some notable examples include: The Ohio State University, University of Florida, University of Toronto at Mississauga,Visual Culture Studies - University of Toronto Mississauga. and University of California Santa Cruz,Spiegelman, Art. "Comix 101." Lecture.
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