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Original:  Next of kin are being informed and no further details will be released until that process is completed. ”
Revised:  Next of kin are being informed and no further details will be released until that process is completed. "
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Original: Filipe Massa wins the first grand prix in his career on the FIA Formula-1 championship 2006 Turkish Grand Prix held on Istanbul Park racing track.
Revised: Filipe Massa won the first Grand Prix in his career on the FIA Formula-1 championship 2006 Turkish Grand Prix held on Istanbul Park racing track.
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Original: Filipe Massa wins the first grand prix in his career on the FIA Formula-1 championship 2006 Turkish Grand Prix held on Istanbul Park racing track.
Revised: Filipe Massa wins the first grand prix in his career in the FIA Formula-1 championship 2006 Turkish Grand Prix held on Istanbul Park racing track.
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Original:  An incident right after the start spoiled the initial grid after third place of Fernando Alonso.
Revised:  An incident right after the start spoilt the initial grid after third place of Fernando Alonso.
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Original:  For example, his Renault teammate Geancarlo Fisicella made a mistake in the first corner and lose some precious seconds.
Revised:  For example, his Renault teammate Geancarlo Fisicella made a mistake in the first corner and lost some precious seconds.
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Original:  Brasilian driver Massa, started from pole  , rushed to his victory just after this incident and stayed in the lead for the most part of the race.
Revised:  Brasilian driver Massa, started from pole position , rushed to his victory just after this incident and stayed in the lead for the most part of the race.
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Original: Filipe Massa won the first Grand Prix in his career in the FIA Formula-1 championship 2006 Turkish Grand Prix held on Istanbul Park racing track.
Revised: This year's Turkish Grand prix saw driver Filipe Massa win his first race at this level of competition, taking the race at the Istanbul Park track.
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Original:  An incident right after the start spoilt the initial grid after third place of Fernando Alonso.
Revised:  An incident right after the start spoilt the initial grid following third placed Fernando Alonso.
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Original:  For example, his Renault teammate Geancarlo Fisicella made a mistake in the first corner and lost some precious seconds.
Revised:  This included his Renault teammate Geancarlo Fisicella made a mistake in the first corner and lost some precious seconds.
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Original:  For example, his Renault teammate Geancarlo Fisicella made a mistake in the first corner and lost some precious seconds.
Revised:  For example, his Renault teammate Geancarlo Fisicella made a mistake in the first corner and losing some precious seconds.
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Original:  Brasilian driver Massa, started from pole position, rushed to his victory just after this incident and stayed in the lead for the most part of the race.
Revised:  Brasilian driver Massa, starting from pole position, rushed to his victory just after this incident and stayed in the lead for the most part of the race.
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Original:  Brasilian driver Massa, started from pole position, rushed to his victory just after this incident and stayed in the lead for the most part of the race.
Revised:  Brasilian driver Massa, started from pole position, capitalised on the start incident took the initiative and maintained the lead for the most part of the race.
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Original:  Brasilian driver Massa, started from pole position, rushed to his victory just after this incident and stayed in the lead for the most part of the race.
Revised:  Brasilian driver Massa, started from pole position, rushed to his victory just after this incident and stayed in the lead for most of the race.
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Original:  His Ferrari teammate Michael Schumacher lost the second position to Alonso, while  German was waiting Massa on the pit-lane.
Revised:  His Ferrari teammate Michael Schumacher lost the second position to Alonso, while the German was waiting Massa on the pit-lane.
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Original:  On the dying laps of the race Schumacher pushed hard on Alonso until the finish line, but the Spaniard calmly resisted his second place.
Revised:  On the dying laps of the race Schumacher pushed hard on Alonso until the finish line, but the Spaniard calmly held on to his second place.
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Original:  Jenson Button, Honda driver , finished fourth.
Revised:  Jenson Button, one of Honda's drivers , finished fourth.
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Original:  Tough luck again for Kimi Raikkonen quitted the race not long ago after the start incident.
Revised:  Once again Kimi Raikkonen failed to finish, quitting the race not long ago after the start incident.
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Original:  Tough luck again for Kimi Raikkonen quitted the race not long ago after the start incident.
Revised:  Tough luck again for Kimi Raikkonen quitted the race not long after after the start incident.
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Original:  Once again his McLaren-Mercedes teammate Pedro De La Rosa replaced him on his position.
Revised:  Once again his McLaren-Mercedes teammate Pedro De La Rosa replaced him in his position.
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Original:  Very poor race for Nick Heidfeld , BMW-Sauber team driver finished last
Revised:  Overall a very poor race for Nick Heidfeld , BMW-Sauber team driver finished last
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Original:  Very poor race for Nick Heidfeld , BMW-Sauber team driver finished last
Revised:  Very poor race for Nick Heidfeld . The BMW-Sauber team driver finished last
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Original: This year's Turkish Grand prix saw driver Filipe Massa win his first race at this level of competition, taking the race at the Istanbul Park track.
Revised: Brazilian driver Filipe Massa win his first race at this level of competition, taking the race at the Istanbul Park track.
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Original: This year's Turkish Grand prix saw driver Filipe Massa win his first race at this level of competition, taking the race at the Istanbul Park track.
Revised: This year's Turkish Grand prix saw driver Filipe Massa 
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Original:  His Ferrari teammate Michael Schumacher lost the second position to Alonso , while the German was waiting Massa on the pit-lane.
Revised:  Massa's Ferrari teammate Michael Schumacher lost the second position to Alonso , while the German was waiting Massa on the pit-lane.
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Original:  His Ferrari teammate Michael Schumacher lost the second position to Alonso , while the German was waiting Massa on the pit-lane.
Revised:  His Ferrari teammate Michael Schumacher lost the second position to Alonso while the German was waiting Massa on the pit-lane.
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Original:  His Ferrari teammate Michael Schumacher lost the second position to Alonso , while the German was waiting Massa on the pit-lane.
Revised:  His Ferrari teammate Michael Schumacher lost the second position to Alonso , while the German was awaiting Massa on the pit-lane.
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Original:  On the dying laps of the race Schumacher pushed hard on Alonso until the finish line , but the Spaniard calmly held on to his second place .
Revised:  On the dying laps of the race Schumacher pushed hard on Alonso until the finish line . They finished together, with the official timing unable to split them, and Alonso won by protecting his line into the final corner .
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Original: Massa began at pole position and capitalised on an incident right at the start, when Renault's Alonso braked hard, causing team mate Geancarlo Fisicella to lose control as he attempted to avoid contact.
Revised: Massa began at pole position and capitalised on an incident right at the start, when Renault's Alonso braked hard, causing team mate Giancarlo Fisichella to lose control as he attempted to avoid contact.
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Original: File photo of Filipe Massa Brazilian driver Filipe Massa, driving for Ferrari, won the Turkish Grand prix at Istanbul Park on Sunday, marking his first Grand Prix victory.
Revised: File photo of Felipe Massa Brazilian driver Filipe Massa, driving for Ferrari, won the Turkish Grand prix at Istanbul Park on Sunday, marking his first Grand Prix victory.
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Original: File photo of Filipe Massa Brazilian driver Filipe Massa, driving for Ferrari, won the Turkish Grand prix at Istanbul Park on Sunday, marking his first Grand Prix victory.
Revised: File photo of Filipe Massa Brazilian driver Felipe Massa, driving for Ferrari, won the Turkish Grand prix at Istanbul Park on Sunday, marking his first Grand Prix victory.
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Original: In a closely fought game last night between the and the Great Britain men's national wheelchair basketball team at the Sport Centre at the Olympic Park, Australia rolled away as 65–51 victors.
Revised: In a closely fought game last night between the and the men's national wheelchair basketball team at the Sport Centre at the Olympic Park, Australia rolled away as 65–51 victors.
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Original:  All three teams are London bound for the Paralympics next month
Revised:  All three teams are bound for the Paralympics next month
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Original:  All three teams are London bound for the Paralympics next month
Revised:  All three teams are London bound for the next month
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Original:  Defense." The Great Britain side, initially very loud from the bench following a 35-30 half time lead, got quieter as the game progressed.
Revised:  Defense." The Great Britain side, initially very loud from the bench following a 35–30 half time lead, got quieter as the game progressed.
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Original:  Defense." The Great Britain side, initially very loud from the bench following a 35 – 30 half time lead, got quieter as the game progressed.
Revised:  Defense." The Great Britain side, initially very loud from the bench following a 37 – 30 half time lead, got quieter as the game progressed.
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Original:  The call followed a fan screaming from the stands a few minutes earlier that the game was not supposed to be a contact sport.
Revised:  The call followed a fan screaming from the stands that the game was not supposed to be a contact sport.
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Original: In a closely fought game Thursday night between the and the men's national wheelchair basketball team at the Sport Centre at the  Olympic Park, Australia rolled away as 65–51 victors.
Revised: In a closely fought game Thursday night between the and the men's national wheelchair basketball team at the Sport Centre at the Sydney Olympic Park, Australia rolled away as 65–51 victors.
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Original:  Theresa May, the Home Secretary, described the strike as "shameful" and noted that the government will put in contingency arrangements  
Revised:  Theresa May, the Home Secretary, described the strike as "shameful" and noted that the government will put in contingency arrangements . 
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Original:  Border patrols at Britain 's airports may be left short-staffed as the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS) have voted to strike for twenty-four hours next week on Thursday, July 26, the day before the opening of the 2012 Olympic Games in London . PCS members working in the Home Office , which operates the Border Agency, voted for the strike on Wednesday to protest against the loss of jobs at the Home Office, as well as pay and conditions of workers.
Revised:  Border patrols at 's airports may be left short-staffed as the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS) have voted to strike for twenty-four hours next week on Thursday, July 26, the day before the opening of the 2012 Olympic Games in London . PCS members working in the Home Office , which operates the Border Agency, voted for the strike on Wednesday to protest against the loss of jobs at the Home Office, as well as pay and conditions of workers.
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Original:  Border patrols at Britain 's airports may be left short-staffed as the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS) have voted to strike for twenty-four hours next week on Thursday, July 26, the day before the opening of the 2012 Olympic Games in London . PCS members working in the Home Office , which operates the Border Agency, voted for the strike on Wednesday to protest against the loss of jobs at the Home Office, as well as pay and conditions of workers.
Revised:  Border patrols at Britain 's airports may be left short-staffed as the (PCS) have voted to strike for twenty-four hours next week on Thursday, July 26, the day before the opening of the 2012 Olympic Games in London . PCS members working in the Home Office , which operates the Border Agency, voted for the strike on Wednesday to protest against the loss of jobs at the Home Office, as well as pay and conditions of workers.
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Original:  Border patrols at Britain 's airports may be left short-staffed as the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS) have voted to strike for twenty-four hours next week on Thursday, July 26, the day before the opening of the 2012 Olympic Games in London . PCS members working in the Home Office , which operates the Border Agency, voted for the strike on Wednesday to protest against the loss of jobs at the Home Office, as well as pay and conditions of workers.
Revised:  Border patrols at Britain 's airports may be left short-staffed as the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS) have voted to strike for twenty-four hours next week on Thursday, July 26, the day before the opening of the in . PCS members working in the Home Office , which operates the Border Agency, voted for the strike on Wednesday to protest against the loss of jobs at the Home Office, as well as pay and conditions of workers.
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Original:  Border patrols at Britain 's airports may be left short-staffed as the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS) have voted to strike for twenty-four hours next week on Thursday, July 26, the day before the opening of the 2012 Olympic Games in London . PCS members working in the Home Office , which operates the Border Agency, voted for the strike on Wednesday to protest against the loss of jobs at the Home Office, as well as pay and conditions of workers.
Revised:  Border patrols at Britain 's airports may be left short-staffed as the Public and Commercial Services Union (PCS) have voted to strike for twenty-four hours next week on Thursday, July 26, the day before the opening of the 2012 Olympic Games in London . PCS members working in the , which operates the Border Agency, voted for the strike on Wednesday to protest against the loss of jobs at the Home Office, as well as pay and conditions of workers.
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Original:  Theresa May, the Home Secretary, described the strike as "shameful" and noted that the government will put in contingency arrangements.
Revised:  Theresa May, the Home Secretary, described the strike as "shameful" and noted the government will put in contingency arrangements.
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Original:  , the head of the union, described the government's reaction as "hysteria" and claimed that "there'll be no disruption to the Olympics"
Revised:  , the head of the union, described the government's reaction as "hysteria" and claimed "there'll be no disruption to the Olympics"
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Original:  The tremor, lasting about 2 minuets , sparked panic in numerous seaside communities on the island.
Revised:  The tremor, lasting about 2 minutes , sparked panic in numerous seaside communities on the island.
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Original:  Local meteorological officials have reported to the Associated Press news agency the earthquake had been 37km (23 mi) under the Sea of Flores . BBC pl:Trz\%C4\%99sienie_ziemi_w_Indonez
Revised:  Local meteorological officials have reported to the Associated Press news agency the earthquake had been 37km (23 mi) under the Sea of Flores BBC pl:Trz\%C4\%99sienie_ziemi_w_Indonez
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Original:  Local meteorological officials have reported to the Associated Press news agency the earthquake had been 37km (23 mi) under the Sea of Flores . BBC pl:Trz\%C4\%99sienie_ziemi_w_Indonez
Revised:  Local meteorological officials have reported to the Associated Press news agency the earthquake had been 37km (23 mi) under the Sea of Flores . 
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Original: A 6.5 magnitude earthquake has hit the Indonesian island of w: Sulawesi, according to the U.S. Geological Survey.
Revised: A 6.5 magnitude earthquake has hit the Indonesian island of Sulawesi, according to the U.S. Geological Survey.
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Original: Earlier today, the beat the Chinese women's national wheelchair basketball team 57–45 at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge taking place at at the Sport Centre at the Olympic Park.
Revised: Earlier today, the beat the women's national wheelchair basketball team 57–45 at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge taking place at at the Sport Centre at the Olympic Park.
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Original: Earlier today, the beat the Chinese women's national wheelchair basketball team 57–45 at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge taking place at at the Sport Centre at the Olympic Park.
Revised: Earlier today, the beat the Chinese women's national team 57–45 at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge taking place at at the Sport Centre at the Olympic Park.
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Original:  The Gliders will play tomorrow at 2:30pm Sydney time in the first place match against an opponent to be determined in a game later today between Germany and Japan .
Revised:  The Gliders will play tomorrow at 2:30pm Sydney time in the first place match against an opponent to be determined in a game later today between and .
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Original:  China's lead came from high level of energy, with the bench loudly supporting their players, few substitution , lots of on the court talk, playing a half court game that involved setting up the defense early and fouling.
Revised:  China's lead came with a high level of energy, with the bench loudly supporting their players, few substitution , lots of on the court talk, playing a half court game that involved setting up the defense early and fouling.
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Original:  China's lead came from high level of energy, with the bench loudly supporting their players, few substitution , lots of on the court talk, playing a half court game that involved setting up the defense early and fouling.
Revised:  China's lead came from high level of energy, the bench loudly supporting their players, few substitution , lots of on the court talk, playing a half court game that involved setting up the defense early and fouling.
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Original:  China's lead came from high level of energy, with the bench loudly supporting their players, few substitution , lots of on the court talk, playing a half court game that involved setting up the defense early and fouling.
Revised:  China's lead came from high level of energy, with the bench loudly supporting their players, few substitutions , lots of on the court talk, playing a half court game that involved setting up the defense early and fouling.
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Original:  Some of China's defensive difficulties continued to hold them back, including a player who entered the box early for a second time in the during a free throw shot by an Australian player.
Revised:  Some of China's defensive difficulties continued to hold them back, including a player who entered the box early for a second time during a free throw shot by an Australian player.
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Original:  There is no word on the victims as of 19:54 UT 
Revised:  There is no word on the victims as of 19:54 UTC. 
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Original:  There is no word on the victims as of 19:54 UTC . Category:Canada Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Afganistan Category:Middle East Category:As
Revised:  There is no word on the victims as of 19:54 UTC Category:Canada Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Afganistan Category:Middle East Category:As
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Original:  There is no word on the victims as of 19:54 UTC . Category:Canada Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Afganistan Category:Middle East Category:As
Revised:  There is no word on the victims as of 19:54 UTC . 
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Original:  There is no word on the victims as of 19:54 UTC  
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Original:  As a group, they largely had mixed feelings.
Revised:  As a group, they had mixed feelings.
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Original:  On the other hand, they felt he would get a technological advantage from his blades. del Toso said she could see that advantage based on her own usage of splints for her legs.
Revised:  On the other hand, they felt he could get a technological advantage from his blades. del Toso said she could see that advantage based on her own usage of splints for her legs.
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Original:  On the other hand, they felt he would get a technological advantage from his blades. del Toso said she could see that advantage based on her own usage of splints for her legs.
Revised:  On the other hand, they felt he would get a technological advantage from his blades. del Toso said she could see that advantage based on her own use of splints for her legs.
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Original: , New South Wales — On Friday, Wikinews sat down with first time Paraylympic Leanne del Toso, Sarah Vinci, and Amber Merritt, and second time competitor at the Pullman Hotel following their 57–45 win against at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in . [[File:The interview with four players.ogv|center|Wikinews reporters LauraHale and Bidgee interview Australian Glider Leanne del Toso, Sarah Vinci, Amber Merritt and Clare Nott]]
Revised: , New South Wales — On Friday, Wikinews sat down with first time Paraylympic Leanne Del Toso, Sarah Vinci, and Amber Merritt, and second time competitor at the Pullman Hotel following their 57–45 win against at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in . [[File:The interview with four players.ogv|center|Wikinews reporters LauraHale and Bidgee interview Australian Glider Leanne del Toso, Sarah Vinci, Amber Merritt and Clare Nott]]
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Original: , New South Wales — On Friday, Wikinews sat down with first time Paraylympic Leanne del Toso, Sarah Vinci, and Amber Merritt, and second time competitor at the Pullman Hotel following their 57–45 win against at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in . [[File:The interview with four players.ogv|center|Wikinews reporters LauraHale and Bidgee interview Australian Glider Leanne del Toso, Sarah Vinci, Amber Merritt and Clare Nott]]
Revised: , New South Wales — On Friday, Wikinews sat down with first time Paraylympic Leanne del Toso, Sarah Vinci, and Amber Merritt, and second time competitor at the Pullman Hotel following their 57–45 win against at the Rollers & Gliders World Challenge in . [[File:The interview with four players.ogv|center|Wikinews reporters LauraHale and Bidgee interview Australian Glider Leanne Del Toso, Sarah Vinci, Amber Merritt and Clare Nott]]
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Original:  On the other hand, they felt he could get a technological advantage from his blades. del Toso said she could see that advantage based on her own use of splints for her legs. del Toso came into wheelchair basketball after acquiring, at the age of nineteen, a degenerative disease that effects her nerves.
Revised:  On the other hand, they felt he could get a technological advantage from his blades. Del Toso said she could see that advantage based on her own use of splints for her legs. del Toso came into wheelchair basketball after acquiring, at the age of nineteen, a degenerative disease that effects her nerves.
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