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Original:  He  stated that such misconceptions play a major role in starting online flame wars . Epley and Kruger found that not only were the receivers of the e-mails overconfident about their understanding of the message's tone, but the senders were as well.
Revised:  He stated that such misconceptions play a major role in starting online flame wars Epley and Kruger found that not only were the receivers of the e-mails overconfident about their understanding of the message's tone, but the senders were as well.
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Original: He also observed that "people often think the tone or emotion in their messages is obvious because they 'hear' the tone they intend in their head as they write."
Revised: He observed that "people often think the tone or emotion in their messages is obvious because they 'hear' the tone they intend in their head as they write."
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Original:  He likened this to findings from previous research by Elizabeth Newton that people vastly overestimated their ability to convey a tune by tapping out its rhythym. 
Revised:  Kruger likened this to findings from previous research by Elizabeth Newton that people vastly overestimated their ability to convey a tune by tapping out its rhythym. 
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Original: People only ascertain the intended tone on an e-mail message about 56\% of the time, not much better than chance, according to a study  by Prof.
Revised: People only ascertain the intended tone on an e-mail message about 56\% of the time, not much better than chance, according to a study led by Prof.
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Original:  They also found that people think they've correctly interpreted the tone 90\% of the time.
Revised:  The research also found that people think they've correctly interpreted the tone 90\% of the time.
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Original: He observed that "people often think the tone or emotion in their messages is obvious because they 'hear' the tone they intend in their head as they write." Kruger likened this to findings from previous research by Elizabeth Newton that people vastly overestimated their ability to convey a tune by tapping out its rhythym . "It's impossible not to hear the song as you're tapping away," he said.
Revised: He observed that "people often think the tone or emotion in their messages is obvious because they 'hear' the tone they intend in their head as they write." Kruger likened this to findings from previous research by Elizabeth Newton that people vastly overestimated their ability to convey a tune by tapping out its rhythm . "It's impossible not to hear the song as you're tapping away," he said.
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Original:  The 25-year-old officer was with a male colleague on her way to the scene of an attempted burglary when she was confronted by a suspect.
Revised:  The 25-year-old officer was with a male colleague on her way to the scene of an attempted burglary when she was confronted by a male suspect.
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Original:  As soon as Rachael Bown - a probationary policewoman - challenged the man , he pulled a firearm and shot her in the stomach before making off.
Revised:  As soon as Rachael Bown - a probationary policewoman - challenged the man , he pulled a firearm and blasted her in the stomach before making off.
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Original:  The incident happened just after mid-night in a district of Nottingham , England.
Revised:  The incident happened just after mid-night in a district of Nottingham 
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Original:  She is the third UK policewoman to be shot in recent months.
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Original:  " Thankfully, she's stable.
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Original: In the Middle East, eight countries are reported to have issues with human traffickers recruiting unemployed gay men to become sex slaves. and , are supposedly the more-common destination countries into which Kenyans are lured with offers of high-paying jobs.
Revised: In the Middle East, several countries are reported to have issues with human traffickers recruiting unemployed gay men to become sex slaves. and , are supposedly the more-common destination countries into which Kenyans are lured with offers of high-paying jobs.
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Original:  The summit is called "Uhuru Peak", with Uhuru being the word for "freedom"  . Each of the non-professional climbers raised 10,000 to help those affected by human trafficking.
Revised:  The summit is called "Uhuru Peak", with Uhuru meaning "freedom" . Each of the non-professional climbers raised 10,000 to help those affected by human trafficking.
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Original:  The summit is called "Uhuru Peak", with Uhuru being the word for "freedom"  . Each of the non-professional climbers raised 10,000 to help those affected by human trafficking.
Revised:  The summit is called "Uhuru Peak", with Uhuru being the word for "freedom" in . Each of the non-professional climbers raised 10,000 to help those affected by human trafficking.
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Original: In the Middle East, several countries are reported to have issues with human traffickers recruiting unemployed gay men to become sex slaves. and , are supposedly the more-common destination countries into which Kenyans are lured with offers of high-paying jobs.
Revised: In the Middle East, several countries are reported to have problems with human traffickers recruiting unemployed gay men to become sex slaves. and , are supposedly the more-common destination countries into which Kenyans are lured with offers of high-paying jobs.
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Original: In the Middle East, several countries are reported to have issues with human traffickers recruiting unemployed gay men to become sex slaves. and , are supposedly the more-common destination countries into which Kenyans are lured with offers of high-paying jobs.
Revised: In the Middle East, several countries are reported to have issues with human traffickers recruiting unemployed gay men to become sex slaves. and are supposedly the more-common destination countries into which Kenyans are lured with offers of high-paying jobs.
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Original:  However, in the — where no law prohibits trafficking, but homosexuality is illegal , the problem is compounded.
Revised:  However, in the — where no law prohibits trafficking, but homosexuality is illegal — the problem is compounded.
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Original:  Difficulties identifying victims within the , or victims seeking help . is becoming more difficult with the sex industry having switched to using hotel rooms as-opposed to street corners.
Revised:  Identifying victims within the , or victims seeking help . is becoming more difficult with the sex industry having switched to using hotel rooms as-opposed to street corners.
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Original:  Difficulties identifying victims within the , or victims seeking help . is becoming more difficult with the sex industry having switched to using hotel rooms as-opposed to street corners.
Revised:  Difficulties identifying victims within the , or victims seeking help , is becoming more difficult with the sex industry having switched to using hotel rooms as-opposed to street corners.
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Original:  Identifying victims within the , or victims seeking help, is becoming more difficult with the sex industry having switched to using hotel rooms as-opposed to street corners.
Revised:  Identifying victims within the , or victims seeking help, is becoming more challenging with the sex industry having switched to using hotel rooms as-opposed to street corners.
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Original: This article is extremely boring, wouldnt you rather hear about Justin Cochran dating Tarah schuett According to an annual report on human trafficking released by the in June last year, 27 million men, women and children are exploited through human trafficking.
Revised:  According to an annual report on human trafficking released by the in June last year, 27 million men, women and children are exploited through human trafficking.
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Original:  In releasing the report last year, Secretary of State  highlighted the importance of international cooperation in addressing trafficking, and cultural issues associated with it.
Revised:  In releasing the report last year, Secretary of State Hillary Clinton highlighted the importance of international cooperation in addressing trafficking, and cultural issues associated with it.
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Original:  In Southern  , Sister Caritas Foster is an advocate for the area's victims of human trafficking.
Revised:  In Southern California , Sister Caritas Foster is an advocate for the area's victims of human trafficking.
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Original:  Northward in ,  members of the King County Sheriff's department realized that law enforcement had to deal supportively with the symptoms of human trafficking — rather than putting victims in jail.
Revised:  Northward in , Washington, members of the King County Sheriff's department realized that law enforcement had to deal supportively with the symptoms of human trafficking — rather than putting victims in jail.
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Original:   's state Senate unanimously passed a human trafficking bill on Tuesday morning.
Revised:  Indiana 's state Senate unanimously passed a human trafficking bill on Tuesday morning.
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Original:  Luis CdeBaca, a special ambassador for human trafficking, is working with  , commonly known as Burma, as the country seeks to improve diplomatic relations with the United States.
Revised:  Luis CdeBaca, a special ambassador for human trafficking, is working with Myanmar , commonly known as Burma, as the country seeks to improve diplomatic relations with the United States.
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Original:  " Ashwini Bhatia February 14, 2006 Elinor Mills January 27, 20
Revised:  Ashwini Bhatia February 14, 2006 Elinor Mills January 27, 20
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Original:  " Ashwini Bhatia February 14, 2006 Elinor Mills January 27, 20
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Original: " ' Don't be evil.
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Original:  This is an important aspect of our culture and is broadly shared within the company. '
Revised:  This is an important aspect of our culture and is broadly shared within the company. 
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Original:  Waxman ( Calif .) said "Careful oversight of this spending is essential given the track record of the Bush administration, which has used taxpayer dollars to fund covert propaganda within the United States."
Revised:  Waxman ( D-Calif .) said "Careful oversight of this spending is essential given the track record of the Bush administration, which has used taxpayer dollars to fund covert propaganda within the United States."
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Original: WUJS Global campaign Against Hatred "Fight hate with humor": URL Please add these references where appropriate.
Revised: WUJS Global campaign Against Hatred "Fight hate with humor": Please add these references where appropriate.
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Original: but why haven't they allowed others ( non-jewish ) to draw the cartoons in this contest?
Revised: but why haven't they allowed others ( non-jews ) to draw the cartoons in this contest?
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Original:  its because they don't need other to laught at them !! !
Revised:  its because they don't need other to laught at them !
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Original:  He was found at 2:20 a.m . URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:Tex
Revised:  He was found at 2:20 a.m URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:Tex
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Original:  He was found at 2:20 a.m . URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:Tex
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Original:  He was found at 2:20 a.m . URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% category:Tex
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Original:  The unidentified man had no signs of injuries from a vehicle but police said there was a good ammount of blood.
Revised:  Police said the unidentified man appeared to have no signs of injuries from a vehicle but police said there was a good ammount of blood.
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Original:  The unidentified man had no signs of injuries from a vehicle but police said there was a good ammount of blood.
Revised:  The unidentified man had no signs of injuries from a car, but police said there was a good ammount of blood.
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Original:  He was taken to a local morgue to get a autopsy as detectives question people on the death.
Revised:  He was taken to a local morgue for a autopsy as detectives question people on the death.
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Original:  He  was found lying in the middle of a intersection .
Revised:  He The man was found lying in the middle of a intersection .
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Original: A Long Beach, California man was shoot today by Long Beach police.
Revised: A Long Beach, California man was shot today by Long Beach police.
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Original:  He lunged at the police and returned fire to kill the man.
Revised:  Police allege that the man lunged at police who returned fire and killed the man.
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Original:  The man was bleeding from his head and wielding a knife  did not listen to police orders to drop down as they tried to tase him it failed.
Revised:  The man was bleeding from his head and wielding a knife . The man did not listen to police orders to drop down as they tried to tase him it failed.
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Original:  As the man lunged at the officers with a knife, both fired several rounds at him - killing him . category:California Category: Crime and l
Revised:  As the man lunged at the officers with a knife, both fired several rounds at him - killing him category:California Category: Crime and l
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Original:  As the man lunged at the officers with a knife, both fired several rounds at him - killing him . category:California Category: Crime and l
Revised:  As the man lunged at the officers with a knife, both fired several rounds at him - killing him . 
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Original:  As the man lunged at the officers with a knife, both fired several rounds at him - killing him
Revised:  As the man lunged at the officers with a knife, both fired several rounds at him , killing him
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Original: Three British soldiers have now been arrested by military police in connection with the video apparently showing abuse of Iraqi civilians by U.K. troops.
Revised: Three British soldiers have now been arrested by military police in connection with the video showing abuse of Iraqi civilians by U.K. troops.
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Original:  Earlier footage showed an explosion in the compound, apparently from one of three hand grenades thrown by Iraqi protesters.
Revised:  Earlier footage showed an explosion in the compound, reportedly from one of three hand grenades thrown by Iraqi protesters.
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Original: The video, filmed January 2004 in the town of Amara north of Basra and made public on Saturday, is taken from a rooftop and shows the troops beating and kicking four Iraqi teenagers  just inside their compound.
Revised: The video, filmed January 2004 in the town of Amara north of Basra and made public on Saturday, shows the troops beating and kicking four Iraqi teenagers just inside their compound.
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Original: The video, filmed January 2004 in the town of Amara north of Basra and made public on Saturday, is taken from a rooftop and shows the troops beating and kicking four Iraqi teenagers  just inside their compound.
Revised: The video, filmed January 2004 in the town of Amara north of Basra and made public on Saturday, is taken from a rooftop and shows the troops punching, kicking and beating four Iraqi teenagers just inside their compound.
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Original:  Warner Music Group  first quarter earnings rose sharply mostly from growth in digital-music sales offsetting falling CD sales.
Revised:  Warner Music Group first quarter earnings rose sharply mostly from growth in digital music sales offsetting falling CD sales.
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Original:  Madonna, Green Day, and James Blunt are on the Warnerlabel .
Revised:  Madonna, Green Day, and James Blunt are signed to subsidary labels of Warner .
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Original:  Mr. Yuan's article was critical  Chinese text books, which never admit the culpability of the government and instead shift the blame to other nations.
Revised:  Mr. Yuan's article was critical of Chinese text books, which never admit the culpability of the government and instead shift the blame to other nations.
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Original:  No response from the government has yet been issue
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Original: A group of former senior Communist part officials in China today have denounced the recent closure of BingDian (Freezing Point), an investigative newspaper, along with the state of government censorship in that country.
Revised: A group of former senior Communist Party officials in China today have denounced the recent closure of BingDian (Freezing Point), an investigative newspaper, along with the state of government censorship in that country.
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Original: A group of former senior Communist Party officials in China today have denounced the recent closure of BingDian (Freezing Point), an investigative newspaper, along with the state of government censorship in that country.
Revised: A group of former senior Communist Party officials in China have denounced the recent closure of BingDian (Freezing Point), an investigative newspaper, along with the state of government censorship in that country.
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Original:  The group includes Li Rui, a former aid to  Mao Zedong, Hu Jiwei, a former newspaper editor, and Zhu Houze, an ex-propaganda chief.
Revised:  The group includes Li Rui, a former aid to Chairman Mao Zedong, Hu Jiwei, a former newspaper editor, and Zhu Houze, an ex-propaganda chief.
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Original:  Mr. Yuan's article was critical of Chinese text books , which never admit the culpability of the government and instead shift the blame to other nations.
Revised:  Mr. Yuan's article was critical of Chinese textbooks , which never admit the culpability of the government and instead shift the blame to other nations.
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Original: January 19, 2005 OLYMPIA, WASHINGTON--Law makers in Washington state want to make a law making it illegal to drive a motor vehicle and have a cell phone in your hand.
Revised:  OLYMPIA, WASHINGTON--Law makers in Washington state want to make a law making it illegal to drive a motor vehicle and have a cell phone in your hand.
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Original:  According to several natinal studies their is a  link between cell phone use and accidents though these statistics are recently discovered.
Revised:  According to several natinal studies their is a Several studies have found a link between cell phone use and accidents though these statistics are recently discovered.
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Original:  According to the Washington State Department of Transportation their were approximatly 700 accidents involving drivers using cell phones last year.
Revised:  According to the Washington State Department of Transportation approximatly 700 accidents involving drivers using cell phones last year.
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Original:  You start thinking about the big picture, it gets kind of scary, out there and people, it's the equivalent of driving while you're intoxicated," said A Federal Way State Sen . Cell phone companies obviously are against this saying that people can still use the radio and put make-up on while driving.
Revised:  You start thinking about the big picture, it gets kind of scary, out there and people, it's the equivalent of driving while you're intoxicated," said A Federal Way State Sen . Cell phone companies are opposed to the bill, saying people can still use the radio and put make-up on while driving.
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Original:  Well, you're taking your eyes off the road," said a govermental affairs represenative for Sprint  
Revised:  Well, you're taking your eyes off the road," said a govermental affairs represenative for Sprint . 
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Original: Washington state legislator Tracy Eide (D, Federal Way ) wants to pass a bill making it illegal to drive a motor vehicle and have a cell phone in your hand.
Revised: Washington Tracy Eide (D, Federal Way ) wants to pass a bill making it illegal to drive a motor vehicle and have a cell phone in your hand.
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Original: Washington state legislator Tracy Eide (D, Federal Way ) wants to pass a bill making it illegal to drive a motor vehicle and have a cell phone in your hand.
Revised: Washington state legislator Tracy Eide (D, ) wants to pass a bill making it illegal to drive a motor vehicle and have a cell phone in your hand.
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Original: Washington state legislator Tracy Eide (D, Federal Way ) wants to pass a bill making it illegal to drive a motor vehicle and have a cell phone in your hand.
Revised: Washington state legislator Tracy Eide (D, Federal Way ) wants to pass a bill making it illegal to drive a motor vehicle and have a in your hand.
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Original:  A New England Journal of Medicine reported study found that driving while using a cell phone creates distractions similar to driving with a blood alcohol reading of 0.08\%.
Revised:  A reported study found that driving while using a cell phone creates distractions similar to driving with a blood alcohol reading of 0.08\%.
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Original:   In the past, wiretap warrents could be secretly  from a special court created by the 1978 Foreign Intelligence Surveillance Act, or publicly obtained from any federal court.
Revised:  In the past, wiretap warrents could be secretly obtained from a special court created by the 1978 Foreign Intelligence Surveillance Act, or publicly obtained from any federal court.
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Original: In the past, wiretap warrents could be secretly obtained from a special court created by the 1978 Foreign Intelligence Surveillance Act, or publicly obtained from any federal court.
Revised: In the past, wiretap warrants could be secretly obtained from a special court created by the 1978 Foreign Intelligence Surveillance Act, or publicly obtained from any federal court.
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Original:  This method is strictly againt the constitution, because it allows anyone in the entire country to become suspect.
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Original:  This issue has caused much criticism from both sides, with those who support it saying that it is a great tool to catch terrorists.
Revised:  The program has been the subject of much debate, with the opposition claiming it is unconstitutional, and supporters saying that it is a great tool to catch terrorists.
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Original:  This issue has caused much criticism from both sides, with those who support it saying that it is a great tool to catch terrorists.
Revised:  This issue has caused much criticism from both sides, with those who support it saying that it helps to catch terrorists.
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Original:    The ABA sets academic standards for law schools and controls the code of ethical standards for lawyers  
Revised:  The ABA sets academic standards for law schools and controls the code of ethical standards for lawyers . 
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Original:  The ABA has also asked congress to affirm that granting such authority was not its intention.
Revised:  The ABA has also asked Congress to affirm that granting such authority was not its intention.
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Original:  President Bush has claimed that only a small number of americans were subject to NSA eavesdrop without the the usual requisite warrants.
Revised:  President Bush has claimed that only a small number of Americans were subject to NSA eavesdrop without the the usual requisite warrants.
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