wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: 00  2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva  VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final  Neuss, Germany  KO (Punches)  2  2:07  2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller  The Champions Club Germany '08, Final  Bamberg, Germany  KO (Right Punch)  2  2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final  Bamberg, Germany  TKO (Ref Stoppage)  2  2008-?-?
Revised: 00 2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final Neuss, Germany KO (Punches) || 2 2:07 2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller The Champions Club Germany '08, Final Bamberg, Germany KO (Right Punch) 2 2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final Bamberg, Germany TKO (Ref Stoppage) 2 2008-?-?
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Original: 00  2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva  VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final  Neuss, Germany  KO (Punches)  2  2:07  2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller  The Champions Club Germany '08, Final  Bamberg, Germany  KO (Right Punch)  2  2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final  Bamberg, Germany  TKO (Ref Stoppage)  2  2008-?-?
Revised: 00 2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final Neuss, Germany KO (Punches) 2 || 2:07 2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller The Champions Club Germany '08, Final Bamberg, Germany KO (Right Punch) 2 2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final Bamberg, Germany TKO (Ref Stoppage) 2 2008-?-?
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Original: 00  2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva  VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final  Neuss, Germany  KO (Punches)  2  2:07  2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller  The Champions Club Germany '08, Final  Bamberg, Germany  KO (Right Punch)  2  2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final  Bamberg, Germany  TKO (Ref Stoppage)  2  2008-?-?
Revised: 00 2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final Neuss, Germany KO (Punches) 2 2:07 2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller || The Champions Club Germany '08, Final Bamberg, Germany KO (Right Punch) 2 2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final Bamberg, Germany TKO (Ref Stoppage) 2 2008-?-?
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Original: 00  2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva  VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final  Neuss, Germany  KO (Punches)  2  2:07  2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller  The Champions Club Germany '08, Final  Bamberg, Germany  KO (Right Punch)  2  2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final  Bamberg, Germany  TKO (Ref Stoppage)  2  2008-?-?
Revised: 00 2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final Neuss, Germany KO (Punches) 2 2:07 2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller The Champions Club Germany '08, Final || Bamberg, Germany KO (Right Punch) 2 2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final Bamberg, Germany TKO (Ref Stoppage) 2 2008-?-?
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Original: 00  2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva  VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final  Neuss, Germany  KO (Punches)  2  2:07  2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller  The Champions Club Germany '08, Final  Bamberg, Germany  KO (Right Punch)  2  2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final  Bamberg, Germany  TKO (Ref Stoppage)  2  2008-?-?
Revised: 00 2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final Neuss, Germany KO (Punches) 2 2:07 2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller The Champions Club Germany '08, Final Bamberg, Germany || KO (Right Punch) 2 2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final Bamberg, Germany TKO (Ref Stoppage) 2 2008-?-?
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Original: 00  2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva  VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final  Neuss, Germany  KO (Punches)  2  2:07  2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller  The Champions Club Germany '08, Final  Bamberg, Germany  KO (Right Punch)  2  2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final  Bamberg, Germany  TKO (Ref Stoppage)  2  2008-?-?
Revised: 00 2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final Neuss, Germany KO (Punches) 2 2:07 2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller The Champions Club Germany '08, Final Bamberg, Germany KO (Right Punch) || 2 2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final Bamberg, Germany TKO (Ref Stoppage) 2 2008-?-?
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Original: 00  2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva  VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final  Neuss, Germany  KO (Punches)  2  2:07  2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller  The Champions Club Germany '08, Final  Bamberg, Germany  KO (Right Punch)  2  2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final  Bamberg, Germany  TKO (Ref Stoppage)  2  2008-?-?
Revised: 00 2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final Neuss, Germany KO (Punches) 2 2:07 2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller The Champions Club Germany '08, Final Bamberg, Germany KO (Right Punch) 2 2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final || Bamberg, Germany TKO (Ref Stoppage) 2 2008-?-?
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Original: 00  2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva  VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final  Neuss, Germany  KO (Punches)  2  2:07  2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller  The Champions Club Germany '08, Final  Bamberg, Germany  KO (Right Punch)  2  2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final  Bamberg, Germany  TKO (Ref Stoppage)  2  2008-?-?
Revised: 00 2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final Neuss, Germany KO (Punches) 2 2:07 2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller The Champions Club Germany '08, Final Bamberg, Germany KO (Right Punch) 2 2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final Bamberg, Germany || TKO (Ref Stoppage) 2 2008-?-?
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Original: 00  2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva  VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final  Neuss, Germany  KO (Punches)  2  2:07  2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller  The Champions Club Germany '08, Final  Bamberg, Germany  KO (Right Punch)  2  2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final  Bamberg, Germany  TKO (Ref Stoppage)  2  2008-?-?
Revised: 00 2009-03-21 Loss Anderson "Braddock" Silva VIP Fight Night 2009, Quarter Final Neuss, Germany KO (Punches) 2 2:07 2008-12-13 Win Jan Müller The Champions Club Germany '08, Final Bamberg, Germany KO (Right Punch) 2 2008-12-13 Win Mutlu Karabulut The Champions Club Germany '08, Semi Final Bamberg, Germany TKO (Ref Stoppage) || 2 2008-?-?
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Original:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch)  2  Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous)  3  6:00  Legend
Revised:  || Win ||align= Patrick Kolbe || || Germany || TKO (Ref Stop/Punch) 2 Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous) 3 6:00 Legend
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Original:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch)  2  Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous)  3  6:00  Legend
Revised:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch) || 2 Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous) 3 6:00 Legend
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Original:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch)  2  Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous)  3  6:00  Legend
Revised:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch) 2 Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships || South Africa || Decision (Unanimous) 3 6:00 Legend
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Original:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch)  2  Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous)  3  6:00  Legend
Revised:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch) 2 Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous) || 3 6:00 Legend
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Original:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch)  2  Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous)  3  6:00  Legend
Revised:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch) 2 Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous) 3 || 6:00 Legend
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Original:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch)  2  Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous)  3  6:00  Legend
Revised:  Win Patrick Kolbe Germany TKO (Ref Stop/Punch) 2 Legend: Kickboxing Record0 Wins (0 (T)KO's), 1 Losses Date Result Opponent Event Location Method Round Time 2016-10-15 Loss Alain Ngalani Last Fighter Standing - SA Championships South Africa Decision (Unanimous) 3 6:00 |- |- | colspan=9 | Legend
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Original:  Shortly after, he announced his retirement from the sport on URL Titles 2016 Glory Fight of the Year URL 2013 Glory 95kg Slam Tournament Runner-up 2011–2013 It's Showtime 95MAX world champion -95 kg (2 title defences) 2010 I.K.B.O.
Revised:  Shortly after, he announced his retirement from the sport on URL Titles 2016 Glory Fight of the Year 2013 Glory 95kg Slam Tournament Runner-up 2011–2013 It's Showtime 95MAX world champion -95 kg (2 title defences) 2010 I.K.B.O.
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Original:  As of 1 April 2019, he is ranked the # 10 light-heavyweight in the world by Combat Press .
Revised:  As of 1 April 2019, he is ranked the # 10 light-heavyweight in the world .
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Original:  Body Progress keep track of personal achievements and physical measurementsduring the entire fitness program and allows members to upload photos to mark personal milestones.
Revised:  Body Progress keep track of personal achievements and measurements, and allows members to upload photos to mark personal milestones.
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Original:  In early 2011, SixReps introduced SixReps Passport, which can be printed out and used as SixReps user identity card.
Revised:  The site also offers a "passport" which can be printed out and used as SixReps user identity card.
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Original:  The site also offers a "passport" which can be printed out and used as an membership card.
Revised:  The site also offers a "passport" which can be printed out and used as a membership card.
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Original: Pathukudi (also Pathukudy and Paththukudi) () is a Malayalam speaking Hindu community- mostly centered in Palakkad district of Kerala state, India.
Revised: Pathukudi (also Pathukudy and Paththukudi) is a Malayalam speaking Hindu community- mostly centered in Palakkad district of Kerala state, India.
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Original: Pathukudi (also Pathukudy and Paththukudi) () is a Malayalam speaking Hindu community- mostly centered in Palakkad district of Kerala state, India.
Revised: Pathukudi (also Pathukudy and Paththukudi) () is a Malayalam speaking Hindu community — mostly centered in Palakkad district of Kerala state, India.
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Original:  Other names used to refer this community are PathuMadom () and Dashagotram() . Pathukudi- the word is derived from two Tamil/Malayalam words namely ‘Pathu’ and ‘Kudi’ – which mean ten families,ten households,ten clans, ten classes, ten Gotras or ten mutts.
Revised:  Other names used to refer this community are PathuMadom and Dashagotram . Pathukudi- the word is derived from two Tamil/Malayalam words namely ‘Pathu’ and ‘Kudi’ – which mean ten families,ten households,ten clans, ten classes, ten Gotras or ten mutts.
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Original:  Other names used to refer this community are PathuMadom () and Dashagotram() . Pathukudi- the word is derived from two Tamil/Malayalam words namely ‘Pathu’ and ‘Kudi’ – which mean ten families,ten households,ten clans, ten classes, ten Gotras or ten mutts.
Revised:  Other names used to refer this community are PathuMadom () and Dashagotram() . The name is derived from two Tamil/Malayalam words namely ‘Pathu’ and ‘Kudi’ – which mean ten families,ten households,ten clans, ten classes, ten Gotras or ten mutts.
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Original:  Other names used to refer this community are PathuMadom () and Dashagotram() . Pathukudi- the word is derived from two Tamil/Malayalam words namely ‘Pathu’ and ‘Kudi’ – which mean ten families,ten households,ten clans, ten classes, ten Gotras or ten mutts.
Revised:  Other names used to refer this community are PathuMadom () and Dashagotram() . Pathukudi- the word is derived from two Tamil/Malayalam words , ‘Pathu’ and ‘Kudi’ – which mean ten families,ten households,ten clans, ten classes, ten Gotras or ten mutts.
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Original:  Other names used to refer this community are PathuMadom () and Dashagotram() . Pathukudi- the word is derived from two Tamil/Malayalam words namely ‘Pathu’ and ‘Kudi’ – which mean ten families,ten households,ten clans, ten classes, ten Gotras or ten mutts.
Revised:  Other names used to refer this community are PathuMadom () and Dashagotram() . Pathukudi- the word is derived from two Tamil/Malayalam words namely ‘Pathu’ and ‘Kudi’ , which mean ten families,ten households,ten clans, ten classes, ten Gotras or ten mutts.
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Original:  Iravan Pattu- authored by Sri.
Revised:  Iravan Pattu- authored by 
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Original:  Senapathy Panicker, Raja .
Revised:  Senapathy Panicker, Raja 
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Original:  Velu Panicker & Sri. Ramar Guru.
Revised:  Velu Panicker & Ramar Guru.
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Original:  Anpan Iravan-CD by Panangattiri Pathukudi Samudayam .
Revised:  Anpan Iravan-CD by Panangattiri Pathukudi Samudayam 
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Original:  Malayala Manorama Marketing feature (12/02/2009) .
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Original:  Later some Tharavads got ruined and after that some of the members were became administrators in aristocratic Nair Tharavads.
Revised:  Later some Tharavads got ruined and after that some of the members became administrators in aristocratic Nair Tharavads.
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Original: He is the son of legendary warrior Arjuna and the Naga princess Uloopi .
Revised: He is the son of legendary warrior Arjuna and the Naga princess Ulupi .
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Original:  So they solved the problem by splitting some ‘Tharavads’ in to two numbers.
Revised:  So they solved the problem by splitting some ‘Tharavads’ into two numbers.
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Original:  Though this community had business profession and had later adopted ‘Shreshthi’ (Chetti) title, they did not mix with other Vaisya communities and have lived according to Brahmin tradition.
Revised:  Though this community had business profession and had later adopted ‘Shreshthi’ (Chetti) title, they did not mix with other Vaishya communities and have lived according to Brahmin tradition.
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Original:  It is said that another Vaisya group who accompanied with them have taken a different route from there when they reached Avinashipattanam.
Revised:  It is said that another Vaishya group who accompanied with them have taken a different route from there when they reached Avinashipattanam.
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Original:  Then some ‘Tharavads’, which migrated to Kollengode, made alliance with Tharakan community (an Arya Vaisya community originated from Poompuhar) and a new community has originated in that region called ‘Pathukudi-Tharakan’ community.
Revised:  Then some ‘Tharavads’, which migrated to Kollengode, made alliance with Tharakan community (an Arya Vaishya community originated from Poompuhar) and a new community has originated in that region called ‘Pathukudi-Tharakan’ community.
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Original:  They observe Pillayar Noimbu for lord Ganesh like Tamil Brahmins and all Vaisya communities.
Revised:  They observe Pillayar Noimbu for lord Ganesh like Tamil Brahmins and all Vaishya communities.
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Original:   Nether Edge, Sheffield Started in June 2013, following the Bus Cyclistes Model, to provide a regular Saturday "bus service" that introduces local residents to safe routes in the corridor between Nether Edge and Sheffield City Centre.
Revised:  URL Nether Edge, Sheffield Started in June 2013, following the Bus Cyclistes Model, to provide a regular Saturday "bus service" that introduces local residents to safe routes in the corridor between Nether Edge and Sheffield City Centre.
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Original: The Occupational Personality Questionnaires, OPQ or OPQ32, are  occupational personality questionnaires used in over 150 countries worldwide.
Revised: The Occupational Personality Questionnaires, OPQ or OPQ32, are widely used occupational personality questionnaires used in over 150 countries worldwide.
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Original: Cakobau's claim to be King of Fiji was by no means universally recognized by his fellow-chiefs, who jealously guarded the independence of their fiefdoms.
Revised: Cakobau's claim to be King of Fiji was by no means universally recognised by his fellow-chiefs, who jealously guarded the independence of their fiefdoms.
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Original: The First Fiji Expedition undertaken by the United States occurred in October 1855 during the civil war on the islands.
Revised: The first Fiji expedition undertaken by the United States occurred in October 1855 during the civil war on the islands.
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Original:  A second  expedition in 1858, involving the crew of , achieved clearer results  but in the end , Cakobau never paid the debt.
Revised:  A second expedition in 1858, involving the crew of , achieved clearer results , but in the end , Cakobau never paid the debt.
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Original:  A second  expedition in 1858, involving the crew of , achieved clearer results  but in the end , Cakobau never paid the debt.
Revised:  A second expedition in 1858, involving the crew of , achieved clearer results but in the end Cakobau never paid the debt.
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Original:  Khalil has said Egypt's workers must create independent trade unions and a political party to represent them: "No party will represent the workers other than the workers' party itself." Prior to the Egyptian Revolution in 2011, Khalil had been arrested many times.
Revised:  Khalil has said Egypt's workers must create independent trade unions and a political party to represent them: "No party will represent the workers other than the workers' party itself." Prior to the Egyptian Revolution of 2011, Khalil had been arrested many times.
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Original:  In 2003  he was arrested by the State Security Investigations Service (SSI) and placed in solitary confinement for his role in the anti-war movement, causing the Stop the War Coalition in Britain to demonstrate outside the Egyptian Embassy in London     
Revised:  In 2003 , he was arrested by the State Security Investigations Service (SSI) and placed in solitary confinement for his role in the anti-war movement, causing the Stop the War Coalition in Britain to demonstrate outside the Egyptian Embassy in London 
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Original:  In 2003  he was arrested by the State Security Investigations Service (SSI) and placed in solitary confinement for his role in the anti-war movement, causing the Stop the War Coalition in Britain to demonstrate outside the Egyptian Embassy in London     
Revised:  In 2003 he was arrested by the State Security Investigations Service (SSI) and placed in solitary confinement for his role in the anti-war movement, causing the Stop the War Coalition in Britain to demonstrate outside the Egyptian Embassy in London . 
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Original:  In 2003  he was arrested by the State Security Investigations Service (SSI) and placed in solitary confinement for his role in the anti-war movement, causing the Stop the War Coalition in Britain to demonstrate outside the Egyptian Embassy in London     
Revised:  In 2003 he was arrested by the State Security Investigations Service (SSI) and placed in solitary confinement for his role in the anti-war movement, causing the Stop the War Coalition in Britain to demonstrate outside the Egyptian Embassy in London References 
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Original: Achievements </ref> Proof.
Revised: Achievements Proof.
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Original:  URL See also Revolutionary Socialists Workers Democratic Party Center for Socialist Studies External links Eyes speak Kamal Khalil's blog (Arabic) Successfully destroyed HIV Kamal Khalil's Twitter account
Revised:  See also Revolutionary Socialists Workers Democratic Party Center for Socialist Studies External links Eyes speak Kamal Khalil's blog (Arabic) Successfully destroyed HIV Kamal Khalil's Twitter account
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Original:  As that later expended cable began to see the 'cash cow' in that and began saling shares to different networks in order to air their studio programs.
Revised:  As that later expended cable began to see the 'cash cow' in that and began selling shares to different networks in order to air their studio programs.
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Original:  NBC was the first to practice the market on September 23, 1961  by programming "NBC Saturday Night at the Movies."
Revised:  NBC was the first to practice the market on September 23, 1961 , by programming "NBC Saturday Night at the Movies."
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Original: The first premium rate television services were Phonevision, Telemeter,  SubscriberVision, among others.
Revised: The first premium rate television services were Phonevision, Telemeter, and SubscriberVision, among others.
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Original:  " She mentions how time went on and as the post-network era developed, that the limited ways there were for medium to be distributed was eliminated.
Revised:  She mentions how time went on and as the post-network era developed, that the limited ways there were for medium to be distributed was eliminated.
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Original:  Microsoft's producers of Halo '' have decided to pass Hollywood studios and produce their own movie.
Revised:  Microsoft's producers of Halo have decided to pass Hollywood studios and produce their own movie.
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Original:  She is now member of a second band called Soulsonic.
Revised:  Presently, she is a member of the band Soulsonic.
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Original:  Georgetown's Complementary and Alternative Medicine Program Home Urban Herbs Georgetown University Medical Center Department of Physiology and Biophysics Georgetown University School of Medicine Georgetown University Medical Center
Revised:  Georgetown's Complementary and Alternative Medicine Program Home Georgetown University Medical Center Department of Physiology and Biophysics Georgetown University School of Medicine Georgetown University Medical Center
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