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Original: Gideon Brand van Zyl, PC ( ) ( 3 Jun 1873–1 Nov 1956) was Governor-General of the Union of South Africa from 1945 to 1950.
Revised: Gideon Brand van Zyl, PC ( ; 3 Jun 1873–1 Nov 1956) was Governor-General of the Union of South Africa from 1945 to 1950.
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Original:  3 Jun 1873 – 1 Nov 1956) was Governor-General of the Union of South Africa from 1945 to 1950.
Revised:  3 June 1873 – 1 Nov 1956) was Governor-General of the Union of South Africa from 1945 to 1950.
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Original:  3 Jun 1873 – 1 Nov 1956) was Governor-General of the Union of South Africa from 1945 to 1950.
Revised:  3 Jun 1873 – 1 November 1956) was Governor-General of the Union of South Africa from 1945 to 1950.
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Original:  He was the first South African-born holder of the office.
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Original:  3 June 1873 – 1 November 1956) was Governor-General of the Union of South Africa from 1945 to 1950.
Revised:  3 June 18731 November 1956) was Governor-General of the Union of South Africa from 1945 to 1950.
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Original: After performing in an active capacity for one year, MaryJane Mwangi was confirmed by the board of NOCK, as the substantive CEO and managing director, for a three-year term effective 1 August 2017, replacing Sumayya Hassan-Athmani, who had resigned in July 2016.
Revised: After performing in an active capacity for one year, Mwangi was confirmed by the board of NOCK, as the substantive CEO and managing director, for a three-year term effective 1 August 2017, replacing Sumayya Hassan-Athmani, who had resigned in July 2016.
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Original:  Family MaryJane Mangi is married to Martin Mbogo, the manager of Tullow Oil Kenya.
Revised:  Family Mangi is married to Martin Mbogo, the manager of Tullow Oil Kenya.
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Original:  Later, she graduated with a Master of Business Administration  from the Stanford Graduate School of Business.
Revised:  Later, she gained a Master of Business Administration from the Stanford Graduate School of Business.
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Original: Background and education She was born in Nigeria circa 1976.
Revised: Background and education She was born in Nigeria in 1976.
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Original:  Her mother, Alero Okotie-Eboh, was a former broadcaster turned stay-at-home-mom .
Revised:  Her mother, Alero Okotie-Eboh, was a former broadcaster who became a full-time homemaker .
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Original:  Her maternal grandfather, Chief Festus Okotie-Eboh, was  the Nigerian Minister of Finance.
Revised:  Her maternal grandfather, Chief Festus Okotie-Eboh, was a politician who became the Nigerian Minister of Finance.
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Original:  She is a half-sister of Emma Thynn, Marchioness of Bath.
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Original:  She was admitted to the University of Oxford, first graduating with a Bachelor of Arts (BA ) degree in Physiological Sciences and later with a Bachelor of Medicine and Bachelor of Surgery (BMBCh ) degree, in 1999.
Revised:  She was admitted to the University of Oxford, where she graduated BA in Physiological Sciences and later with a Bachelor of Medicine and Bachelor of Surgery (BMBCh ) degree, in 1999.
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Original:  She was admitted to the University of Oxford, first graduating with a Bachelor of Arts (BA ) degree in Physiological Sciences and later with a Bachelor of Medicine and Bachelor of Surgery (BMBCh ) degree, in 1999.
Revised:  She was admitted to the University of Oxford, first graduating with a Bachelor of Arts (BA ) degree in Physiological Sciences and BMBCh in medicine in 1999.
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Original:  Later, she gained a Master of Business Administration degree from the Stanford Graduate School of Business   .
Revised:  Later, she gained an MBA from the Stanford Graduate School of Business .
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Original:  Later, she gained a Master of Business Administration degree from the Stanford Graduate School of Business   .
Revised:  Later, she gained a Master of Business Administration degree from the Stanford Graduate School of Business . .
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Original: Women physicians Category:Businesspeople from Lagos Category:Alumni of the University of Oxford Amy Category:Stanford University alumni Category:Nigerian businesspeople Category:Nigerian businesspeople in the oil industry Category:Nigerian women in business Category:Nigerian business executives Category:Nigerian women business executives Category:Itsekiri people Category:Yoruba women in business Category:Nigerian women medical doctors Category:Nigerian chief executives Category:Yoruba  physicia
Revised: Women physicians Category:Businesspeople from Lagos Category:Alumni of the University of Oxford Amy Category:Stanford University alumni Category:Nigerian businesspeople Category:Nigerian businesspeople in the oil industry Category:Nigerian women in business Category:Nigerian business executives Category:Nigerian women business executives Category:Itsekiri people Category:Yoruba women in business Category:Nigerian women medical doctors Category:Nigerian chief executives Category:Yoruba women physicia
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Original:  He started his career in 1961 as a 'flying lecturer ' at Andalas University, Padang, West Sumatra;
Revised:  He started his career in 1961 as a lecturer at Andalas University, Padang, West Sumatra;
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Original:  a 'flying lecturer' being a term for lecturers commuting from the University of Indonesia to help staff the newly reopened universities and institutions in Padang .
Revised:  he commuted from the University of Indonesia to help staff the newly reopened universities and institutions in Padang .
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Original:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraintsKalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389.
Revised:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraints.Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389.
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Original:  In all of these areas, Ormsby-Gore laid the educational foundations for the first generation of African professional men and women in these territories, and for such future political leaders as Jomo Kenyatta, Kwame Nkrumah and Jaramogi Oginga OdingaOliver and Atmore (2005), pp. 176-7 .
Revised:  In all of these areas, Ormsby-Gore laid the educational foundations for the first generation of African professional men and women in these territories, and for such future political leaders as Jomo Kenyatta, Kwame Nkrumah and Jaramogi Oginga OdingaOliver and Atmore (2005), pp. 176-7 
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Original:   Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389. Uganda The commission recommended the extension of the Uganda Railway west and north of its existing terminus, to open more areas for cotton cultivation, the most valuable export of the protectorate, and to reduce transport costs in those areas where cotton was already grownOrmsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 139-40.
Revised:  . Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389. Uganda The commission recommended the extension of the Uganda Railway west and north of its existing terminus, to open more areas for cotton cultivation, the most valuable export of the protectorate, and to reduce transport costs in those areas where cotton was already grownOrmsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 139-40.
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Original:  It also referred to the problems that had arisen in the Kingdom of Buganda over pre-colonial land rightsMukwaya (1953), pp. 3, 6-8, and the more general issue of the relationship of Buganda to the protectorateOrmsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), p. 147.
Revised:  It also referred to the problems that had arisen in the Kingdom of Buganda over pre-colonial land rightsMukwaya (1953), pp. 3, 6-8, and the more general issue of the relationship of Buganda to the protectorateOrmsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), p. 147
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Original:   Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389. Zanzibar Zanzibar had become a British protectorate in 1890 after Germany had secured the cessation of most of its mainland territories to German East Africa, and was ruled by a sultan advised, initially by a locally-based British resident.
Revised:  . Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389. Zanzibar Zanzibar had become a British protectorate in 1890 after Germany had secured the cessation of most of its mainland territories to German East Africa, and was ruled by a sultan advised, initially by a locally-based British resident.
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Original:  They also recommended replacing the Sultan’s consultative Protectorate Council with a Legislative Council, as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial membersOrmsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132. Sources M. R. Dilley, (1966).
Revised:  They also recommended replacing the Sultan’s consultative Protectorate Council with a Legislative Council, as was normal in other African dependencies, and including more unofficial membersOrmsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), p. 132 Sources M. R. Dilley, (1966).
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Original: The Ormsby-Gore Commission was a Parliamentary Commission, with the official title The East Africa Commission  Its chairman, William Ormsby-Gore, later  fourth Baron Harlech, was appointed in June 1924 together with two other Member of Parliament  .
Revised: The Ormsby-Gore Commission was a Parliamentary Commission, with the official title The East Africa Commission . Its chairman, William Ormsby-Gore, later fourth Baron Harlech, was appointed in June 1924 together with two other Member of Parliament .
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Original: The Ormsby-Gore Commission was a Parliamentary Commission, with the official title The East Africa Commission  Its chairman, William Ormsby-Gore, later  fourth Baron Harlech, was appointed in June 1924 together with two other Member of Parliament  .
Revised: The Ormsby-Gore Commission was a Parliamentary Commission, with the official title The East Africa Commission Its chairman, William Ormsby-Gore, later the fourth Baron Harlech, was appointed in June 1924 together with two other Member of Parliament .
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Original: The Ormsby-Gore Commission was a Parliamentary Commission, with the official title The East Africa Commission  Its chairman, William Ormsby-Gore, later  fourth Baron Harlech, was appointed in June 1924 together with two other Member of Parliament  .
Revised: The Ormsby-Gore Commission was a Parliamentary Commission, with the official title The East Africa Commission Its chairman, William Ormsby-Gore, later fourth Baron Harlech, was appointed in June 1924 together with two other Member of Parliament as commissioners .
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Original:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraints. ... Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389  Only a minority of East Africa Committee members represented the interests of Africans and, after it appointed the Ormsby-Gore Commission, and following the resignation of the First MacDonald ministry and  that Commission's report, the Southborough Committee was disbanded in June 1925 as  no longer required.
Revised:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraints. ref> Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389 Only a minority of East Africa Committee members represented the interests of Africans and, after it appointed the Ormsby-Gore Commission, and following the resignation of the First MacDonald ministry and that Commission's report, the Southborough Committee was disbanded in June 1925 as no longer required.
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Original:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraints. ... Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389  Only a minority of East Africa Committee members represented the interests of Africans and, after it appointed the Ormsby-Gore Commission, and following the resignation of the First MacDonald ministry and  that Commission's report, the Southborough Committee was disbanded in June 1925 as  no longer required.
Revised:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraints. ... Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389 </ref> Only a minority of East Africa Committee members represented the interests of Africans and, after it appointed the Ormsby-Gore Commission, and following the resignation of the First MacDonald ministry and that Commission's report, the Southborough Committee was disbanded in June 1925 as no longer required.
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Original:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraints. ... Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389  Only a minority of East Africa Committee members represented the interests of Africans and, after it appointed the Ormsby-Gore Commission, and following the resignation of the First MacDonald ministry and  that Commission's report, the Southborough Committee was disbanded in June 1925 as  no longer required.
Revised:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraints. ... Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389 Only a minority of East Africa Committee members represented the interests of Africans and, after it appointed the Ormsby-Gore Commission, and following the resignation of the First MacDonald ministry and the publication of that Commission's report, the Southborough Committee was disbanded in June 1925 as no longer required.
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Original:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraints. ... Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389  Only a minority of East Africa Committee members represented the interests of Africans and, after it appointed the Ormsby-Gore Commission, and following the resignation of the First MacDonald ministry and  that Commission's report, the Southborough Committee was disbanded in June 1925 as  no longer required.
Revised:  Its report in 1929 re-examined and supported the closer union of Kenya, Uganda and Tanganyika, but this was not acted on owing to financial constraints. ... Kalinga (2012), pp. 193, 389 Only a minority of East Africa Committee members represented the interests of Africans and, after it appointed the Ormsby-Gore Commission, and following the resignation of the First MacDonald ministry and that Commission's report, the Southborough Committee was disbanded in June 1925 as being no longer required.
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Original: Dilley (1966), pp. 18, 165Gupta (1975), p. 75 Baldwin's Conservative government that replaced MacDonald's ministry took little action on the Ormsby-Gore Commission's report, but appointed the Hilton Young Commission in 1926 to look into the possible closer union of the British territories in East and Central Africa.
Revised: Dilley (1966), pp. 18, 165Gupta (1975), p. 75 Baldwin's Conservative government which replaced MacDonald's ministry took little action on the Ormsby-Gore Commission's report, but appointed the Hilton Young Commission in 1926 to look into the possible closer union of the British territories in East and Central Africa.
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Original:  It reported that, owing to transport difficulties, its visits to Northern Rhodesia and Nyasaland were short, and it was unable to visit any of North-Eastern Rhodesia, northern Nyasaland, southern Tanganyika or the Lake Tanganyika area.
Revised:  However, it reported that, owing to transport difficulties, its visits to Northern Rhodesia and Nyasaland were short, and it was unable to visit any of North-Eastern Rhodesia, northern Nyasaland, southern Tanganyika or the Lake Tanganyika area.
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 3-4 The commissioners Ormsby-Gore, the commission's chairman was the Conservative Member of Parliament (MP) for Stafford from 1910 to 1938 and Under-Secretary of State for the Colonies from 1922 to 1929, except during the MacDonald ministry, from June to November 1924.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 3-4 The commissioners Ormsby-Gore, the commission's Chairman was the Conservative Member of Parliament (MP) for Stafford from 1910 to 1938 and Under-Secretary of State for the Colonies from 1922 to 1929, except during the MacDonald ministry, from June to November 1924.
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 3-4 The commissioners Ormsby-Gore, the commission's chairman was the Conservative Member of Parliament (MP) for Stafford from 1910 to 1938 and Under-Secretary of State for the Colonies from 1922 to 1929, except during the MacDonald ministry, from June to November 1924.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 3-4 The commissioners Ormsby-Gore, the commission's chairman was the Conservative Member of Parliament (MP) for Stafford from 1910 to 1938 and Under-Secretary of State for the Colonies from 1922 to 1929, except during the period of the MacDonald ministry from June to November 1924.
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Original:  He was regarded by Robert Coryndon, then governor of Kenya, as being sympathetic to African peasant production and opposed to European settler demands  for control over more land and for self-determination, with only limited suffrage for Asians and Africans.
Revised:  He was regarded by Robert Coryndon, then governor of Kenya, as being sympathetic to African peasant production and opposed to European settler demands both for control over more land and for self-determination, with only limited suffrage for Asians and Africans.
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Original:  He was regarded by Robert Coryndon, then governor of Kenya, as being sympathetic to African peasant production and opposed to European settler demands  for control over more land and for self-determination, with only limited suffrage for Asians and Africans.
Revised:  He was regarded by Robert Coryndon, then governor of Kenya, as being sympathetic to African peasant production and opposed to European settler demands for control over more land for self-determination, with only limited suffrage for Asians and Africans.
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Original:  He was regarded by Robert Coryndon, then governor of Kenya, as being sympathetic to African peasant production and opposed to European settler demands  for control over more land and for self-determination, with only limited suffrage for Asians and Africans.
Revised:  He was regarded by Robert Coryndon, then governor of Kenya, as being sympathetic to African peasant production and opposed to European settler demands for control over more land and for self-determination, conceding only limited suffrage for Asians and Africans.
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Original:  He was regarded by Robert Coryndon, then governor of Kenya, as being sympathetic to African peasant production and opposed to European settler demands  for control over more land and for self-determination, with only limited suffrage for Asians and Africans.
Revised:  He was regarded by Robert Coryndon, then governor of Kenya, as being sympathetic to African peasant production and opposed to European settler demands for control over more land and for self-determination, with only limited suffrage to Asians and Africans.
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Original:  Ormsby-Gore was more supportive of a dual policy of Europeans producing the more valuable export crops while Africans produced food and those cash crops that did not compete with European growers,Youé (1986), p. 192 but he never accepted the political aspirations of the settlersDilley (1966), p. 192 Transport and Communications The commission noted that the economic developed of large areas of East and Central Africa was hampered by limited transport facilities and high transport costs.
Revised:  Ormsby-Gore was more supportive of a dual policy of Europeans producing the more valuable export crops while Africans produced food and those cash crops that did not compete with European growers,Youé (1986), p. 192 but he never accepted the political aspirations of the settlersDilley (1966), p. 192 Transport and Communications The commission noted that the economic development of large areas of East and Central Africa was hampered by limited transport facilities and high transport costs.
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 18-19 Native Policy This longest section, almost one-third of the whole report, restated the principles of the Devonshire Declaration of 1923  that the Africans in Kenya and Uganda were as much under British government "Trusteeship" as those in Tanganyika were under its League of Nations mandate, and that African interests must be paramount in Kenya.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 18-19 Native Policy This longest section, almost one-third of the whole report, restated the principles of the Devonshire Declaration of 1923 , that the Africans in Kenya and Uganda were as much under British government "Trusteeship" as those in Tanganyika were under its League of Nations mandate, and that African interests must be paramount in Kenya.
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Original: Dilley (1966), pp. 171-2 It  considered the Devonshire Declaration should apply to all British dependencies in East and Central Africa, defining "Trusteeship" as including both the social and educational development of African people and development of the economic resources of those dependencies.
Revised: Dilley (1966), pp. 171-2 It also considered the Devonshire Declaration should apply to all British dependencies in East and Central Africa, defining "Trusteeship" as including both the social and educational development of African people and development of the economic resources of those dependencies.
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 21-2 The commissioners accepted Indirect rule where it existed , particularly in Uganda , but considered it was in decline elsewhere and that, where direct rule by British administrators had replaced the power of chiefs, the latter should only be used to assist these administrators.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 21-2 The commissioners accepted Indirect rule where it existed , particularly in Uganda . However, the commission considered that it was in decline elsewhere and that, where direct rule by British administrators had replaced the power of chiefs, the latter should only be used to assist these administrators.
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Original: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 47-9 In most of the territories, systems of land tenure included land recognised as belonging to their African peoples (native land) and under customary law, land alienated to non-natives as freehold or leasehold land, and a residual category of Crown land, capable of being declared native land or alienated , and including forests and game reserves.
Revised: Ormsby-Gore, Church and Linfield (1925), pp. 47-9 In most of the territories, systems of land tenure included land recognised as belonging to their African peoples (native land) which was dealt with under customary law, land alienated to non-natives as freehold or leasehold land, and a residual category of Crown land, capable of being declared native land or alienated , and including forests and game reserves.
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