wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Jeffrey Lam thinks that there is not enough restriction for shoutingin the train . MTR replied that the shouter can be advised to leave the train or even prosecuted
Revised:  Jeffrey Lam thinks that there is not enough restriction for shoutingin the train . MTR replied that anyone who shouts in the train can be advised to leave the train or even prosecuted
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Original: Two MTR trains The MTR Corporation , the only railway company in Hong Kong since the rail merge in 2007, has loosened their rules.
Revised: Two MTR trains The , the only railway company in Hong Kong since the rail merge in 2007, has loosened their rules.
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Original: Two MTR trains The MTR Corporation , the only railway company in Hong Kong since the rail merge in 2007, has loosened their rules.
Revised: Two MTR trains The MTR Corporation , the only railway company in Hong Kong since the in 2007, has loosened their rules.
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Original:  Democratic Party member James To has expressed his concerns about a new rule that outlaws the display of promotional material.
Revised:  member has expressed his concerns about a new rule that outlaws the display of promotional material.
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Original:  According to To, the wearing of Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirts or acting the Goddess of Democracy may breach the new MTR rules.
Revised:  According to To, the wearing of -related T-shirts or acting the Goddess of Democracy may breach the new MTR rules.
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Original:  According to To, the wearing of Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirts or acting the Goddess of Democracy may breach the new MTR rules.
Revised:  According to To, the wearing of Tiananmen Square Incident-related T-shirts or acting the may breach the new MTR rules.
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Original:  Unionist Li Fung-ying is also confused whether chewing gum was considered food.
Revised:  Unionist is also confused whether chewing gum was considered food.
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Original:  Wong Kwok-hing believes that the MTR corporation should call upon more effort to advertise a more 'civilised' and 'polite' way of taking the train.
Revised:  believes that the MTR corporation should call upon more effort to advertise a more 'civilised' and 'polite' way of taking the train.
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Original:  Jeffrey Lam thinks that the new rules do not do enough to restrict shouting.
Revised:  thinks that the new rules do not do enough to restrict shouting.
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Original: Heavy rains have started on Sunday early morning through the most of southern Pakistan as Cyclone Phet approached landfall.
Revised: Heavy rains started on Sunday early morning through the most of southern Pakistan as Cyclone Phet approached landfall.
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Original: Heavy rains have started on Sunday early morning through the most of southern Pakistan as Cyclone Phet approached landfall.
Revised: Heavy rains have started on Sunday early morning throughout most of southern Pakistan as Cyclone Phet approached landfall.
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Original: The storm system, named Cyclon Phet, has moved from Oman and is expected to reach Pakistan by Sunday evening.
Revised: The storm system, named Cyclone Phet, has moved from Oman and is expected to reach Pakistan by Sunday evening.
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Original: The storm system , named Cyclone Phet, has moved from Oman and is expected to reach Pakistan by Sunday evening.
Revised: The storm system has moved from Oman and is expected to reach Pakistan by Sunday evening.
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Original:  The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and  key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms Roche and GlaxoSmithKline (GSK) , claim reports by the British Medical Journal (BMJ), the Bureau of Investigative Journalism (BIJ) and the Council of Europe .
Revised:  The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and that key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms Roche and GlaxoSmithKline (GSK) , claim reports by the British Medical Journal (BMJ), the Bureau of Investigative Journalism (BIJ) and the Council of Europe .
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Original:  The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and  key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms Roche and GlaxoSmithKline (GSK) , claim reports by the British Medical Journal (BMJ), the Bureau of Investigative Journalism (BIJ) and the Council of Europe .
Revised:  The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms Roche and GlaxoSmithKline (GSK) .
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Original: Reports suggest the World Health Organisation's declaring a swine flu pandemic was a 'monumental error ' driven by profit-hungry drug companies spreading fear.
Revised: Reports suggest the World Health Organisation's declaring a swine flu pandemic was a error driven by private profit drug companies leading to unjustified fear.
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Original: Reports suggest the World Health Organisation's declaring a swine flu pandemic was a error driven by private profit drug companies leading to unjustified fear.
Revised: Reports suggest the World Health Organisation's declaring a swine flu pandemic was an error driven by private profit drug companies leading to unjustified fear.
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Original: Reports suggest the World Health Organisation's declaring a swine flu pandemic was a error driven by private profit drug companies leading to unjustified fear.
Revised: Reports suggest the World Health Organisation's declaring a swine flu pandemic was a error driven by drug companies and leading to unjustified fear.
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Original:  The advice prompted many countries around the world into buying up large stocks of Tamiflu , made by Roche, and Relenza manufactured by GSK.
Revised:  The advice prompted many countries around the world into buying up large stocks of , made by Roche, and Relenza manufactured by GSK.
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Original:  The advice prompted many countries around the world into buying up large stocks of Tamiflu , made by Roche, and Relenza manufactured by GSK.
Revised:  The advice prompted many countries around the world into buying up large stocks of Tamiflu , made by Roche, and manufactured by GSK.
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Original:  United States President Barack Obama has nominated Air Force Lt. Gen. James Clapper to be the new director of national intelligence .
Revised:  United States President Barack Obama has nominated Air Force Lt. Gen. James Clapper to be the new director of National Intelligence .
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Original:  He said: "I don't think Clapper's the right person for the job,"  . The Associated Press, informed by senior congressional staff, reported that the Republican Senator had not been invited to discuss the nomination and is considering asking his Republican support to block the nomination.
Revised:  "I don't think Clapper's the right person for the job," . The Associated Press, informed by senior congressional staff, reported that the Republican Senator had not been invited to discuss the nomination and is considering asking his Republican support to block the nomination.
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Original:  He said: "I don't think Clapper's the right person for the job,"  . The Associated Press, informed by senior congressional staff, reported that the Republican Senator had not been invited to discuss the nomination and is considering asking his Republican support to block the nomination.
Revised:  He said: "I don't think Clapper's the right person for the job," he said . The Associated Press, informed by senior congressional staff, reported that the Republican Senator had not been invited to discuss the nomination and is considering asking his Republican support to block the nomination.
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Original:  Both Democratic Party (United States) and Republican Party (United States) senior representatives in the Senate Intelligence Comitee have publicly expressed their reservation about the nomination.
Revised:  Both US Democratic Party and Republican Party (United States) senior representatives in the Senate Intelligence Comitee have publicly expressed their reservation about the nomination.
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Original:  Both Democratic Party (United States) and Republican Party (United States) senior representatives in the Senate Intelligence Comitee have publicly expressed their reservation about the nomination.
Revised:  Both Democratic Party (United States) and Republican Party senior representatives in the Senate Intelligence Comitee have publicly expressed their reservation about the nomination.
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Original:  Both US Democratic Party and Republican Party senior representatives in the Senate Intelligence Comitee have publicly expressed their reservation about the nomination.
Revised:  Both US Democratic Party and Republican Party senior representatives in the Senate Intelligence Committee have publicly expressed their reservation about the nomination.
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Original:  According to to the Associated Press, republican senator Kit Bond doubted James Clapper's ability to command among some of the intelligence community personalities.
Revised:  According to to the Associated Press, Republican senator Kit Bond doubted James Clapper's ability to command among some of the intelligence community personalities.
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Original:  According to to the Associated Press, republican senator Kit Bond doubted James Clapper's ability to command among some of the intelligence community personalities.
Revised:  According to to the Associated Press, republican senator Kit Bond doubted Clapper's ability to command among some of the intelligence community personalities.
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Original:  The Associated Press, informed by senior congressional staff, reported that the Republican Senator had not been invited to discuss the nomination and is considering asking his Republican support to block the nomination.
Revised:  The Associated Press, informed by senior congressional staff, reported that the Republican senator had not been invited to discuss the nomination and is considering asking his Republican support to block the nomination.
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Original:  United States President Barack Obama has nominated Air Force Lt. Gen. James Clapper to be the new director of National Intelligence.
Revised:  United States President Barack Obama has nominated Air Force Lieutenant General James Clapper to be the new director of National Intelligence.
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Original: Barack Obama has requested a quick confirmation from the American Senate.
Revised: Barack Obama has requested a quick confirmation from the Senate.
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Original: Commander Sergei Krikalev and flight engineer John Phillips begin a planned six-hour spacewalk earlier today, their first in the four months both men have been on the station.
Revised: Commander Sergei Krikalev and flight engineer John Phillips began a planned six-hour spacewalk earlier today, their first in the four months both men have been on the station.
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Original:  A rushed timetable for the previous launch has been criticised as a major contributing factor to  "same behavioral problems that contributed to the Columbia tragedy  " and AP story stated
Revised:  A rushed timetable for the previous launch has been criticised as a major contributing factor to the "same behavioral problems that contributed to the Columbia tragedy " and AP story stated
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Original:  A rushed timetable for the previous launch has been criticised as a major contributing factor to  "same behavioral problems that contributed to the Columbia tragedy  " and AP story stated
Revised:  A rushed timetable for the previous launch has been criticised as a major contributing factor to "same behavioral problems that contributed to the Columbia tragedy , " and AP story stated
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Original:  A rushed timetable for the previous launch has been criticised as a major contributing factor to  "same behavioral problems that contributed to the Columbia tragedy  " and AP story stated
Revised:  A rushed timetable for the previous launch has been criticised as a major contributing factor to "same behavioral problems that contributed to the Columbia tragedy " an AP story stated
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Original: NASA are delaying the next Shuttle flight until next year so their engineers have time to address the foam problem that occurred during the most recent flight.
Revised: NASA delayed the next Shuttle flight until next year so their engineers have time to address the foam problem that occurred during the most recent flight.
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Original: The block was lifted 11:58 p.m. (23:58) Bangladesh Time ( 1758 UTC).
Revised: The block was lifted 11:58 p.m. (23:58) Bangladesh Time ( 17:58 UTC).
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Original: The block was lifted 11:58 p.m. (23:58) Bangladesh Time (17:58 UTC).
Revised: The block was lifted 11:58 p.m. Bangladesh Time (17:58 UTC).
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Original:  According to BDNews24.com, Mir Masud Kabir, the Mango Telecom Services managing director, had received a phone call from Major General Zia Ahmed at 11:57 p.m. ( 1757 UTC), asking him to lift the Facebook block.
Revised:  According to BDNews24.com, Mir Masud Kabir, the Mango Telecom Services managing director, had received a phone call from Major General Zia Ahmed at 11:57 p.m. ( 17:57 UTC), asking him to lift the Facebook block.
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Original:  The authorties had decided to unblock Facebook after the company promised to remove the content considered blasphemous as well as the 'obnoxious' pictures of the country's leaders.
Revised:  The authorties had decided to unblock Facebook after the company promised to remove the content considered blasphemous as well as the "obnoxious" pictures of the country's leaders.
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Original:  however, as he had moved, they were unable to contact him.
Revised:  however, as he had moved, they were unable to find him.
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Original: A suspect in a hit-and-run located in San Francisco, California, was arrested after hitting four cyclists and  lying to the police after two days .
Revised: A suspect in a hit-and-run located in San Francisco, California, was arrested after hitting four cyclists and lying to the police .
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Original:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won £100,000 (US$144,580, €120,313, A$175,079) and a place at The Royal Variety Performance, an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the British Royal Family  
Revised:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won £100,000 (US$144,580, €120,313, A$175,079) and a place at The Royal Variety Performance, an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the British Royal Family . 
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Original: In no particular order, the top three acts were revealed to be two dancers known by their stage name of Twist + Pulse, gymnastic group Spelbound and Kieran Gaffney, whose act involves playing on the drum kit.
Revised: In no particular order, the top three acts were revealed to be two dancers known by their stage name of Twist and Pulse, gymnastic group Spelbound and Kieran Gaffney, whose act involves playing on the drum kit.
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Original:  Bookmakers had previously predicted that Spelbound would be the most likely act to become the winner of the series  & 
Revised:  Bookmakers had previously predicted that Spelbound would be the most likely act to become the winner of the series . & 
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Original: The Australian Federal Government has reviled today that it is going to give A $21 million as compensation to approximately 600 former RAAF maintenance workers, who where exposed to highly toxic chemicals while working on the fuel tanks of the Nations F1-11 fleet.
Revised: The Australian Federal Government has revealed today that it is going to give A $21 million as compensation to approximately 600 former RAAF maintenance workers, who where exposed to highly toxic chemicals while working on the fuel tanks of the Nations F1-11 fleet.
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Original:  The agreement allows for international arbitrators to resolve a border dispute that dates back nearly 20 years to the break-up of Yugoslavia.
Revised:  The Border Arbitration Agreement allows for international arbitrators to resolve a border dispute that dates back nearly 20 years to the break-up of Yugoslavia.
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Original:  In March Prime Minister Borut Pahor's centre-left government . yielded to demands for a referendum on whether to accept a border deal.
Revised:  In March Prime Minister Borut Pahor's centre-left government yielded to demands for a referendum on whether to accept a border deal.
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Original:  A rejection could delay Croatian membership.
Revised:  A rejection could have delayed Croatian membership.
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Original:  Slovenia has blocked Croatia's EU accession talks over the border issue . Polling stations are open from 0700-1900 (0500-1700 GMT).
Revised:  Slovenia has blocked Croatia's membership talks over the border issue . Polling stations are open from 0700-1900 (0500-1700 GMT).
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Original: Slovenians  voted in a referendum on Sunday in favor of a border deal with Croatia.
Revised: Slovenians voted in a referendum in favour of a border deal with Croatia.
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Original:  Parliaments in both Slovenia and Croatia approved the deal, which would be binding on both countries.
Revised:  Parliaments in both countries approved the deal, which would be binding on both countries.
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Original:  Parliaments in both Slovenia and Croatia approved the deal, which would be binding on both countries.
Revised:  Parliaments in both Slovenia and Croatia approved the deal, which will be binding on both countries.
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Original:  "Solving the border dispute with Croatia is the basis for a lasting peace, security and friendship of both nations," Pahor said , "If it is rejected, it is questionable how long I or my successor will need to reach another agreement which, I believe, could not be better." he added.
Revised:  "Solving the border dispute with Croatia is the basis for a lasting peace, security and friendship of both nations," Pahor said . "If it is rejected, it is questionable how long I or my successor will need to reach another agreement which, I believe, could not be better." he added.
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Original:  The 2,000 remaining votes, from Slovenians living abroad, can't change the outcome.
Revised:  It is impossible for the remaining 2,000 remaining votes, from Slovenians living abroad, can't change the outcome.
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Original:  The 2,000 remaining votes, from Slovenians living abroad, can't change the outcome.
Revised:  The 2,000 votes, cast by Slovenians living abroad, can't change the outcome.
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Original:  The 2,000 remaining votes, from Slovenians living abroad, can't change the outcome.
Revised:  The 2,000 remaining votes, from Slovenians living abroad, to change the outcome.
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Original:  Slovenia is  between Italy and Croatia,  the dispute involves land on the Istrian peninsula in the northern Adriatic and the small Bay of Piran in the Adriatic Sea.
Revised:  Slovenia is situated between Italy and Croatia, the dispute involves land on the Istrian peninsula in the northern Adriatic and the small Bay of Piran in the Adriatic Sea.
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Original:  Slovenia is  between Italy and Croatia,  the dispute involves land on the Istrian peninsula in the northern Adriatic and the small Bay of Piran in the Adriatic Sea.
Revised:  Slovenia is between Italy and Croatia, where the dispute involves land on the Istrian peninsula in the northern Adriatic and the small Bay of Piran in the Adriatic Sea.
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Original:  The panel of five international experts will define the  land and maritime border and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it sees as its own.
Revised:  A panel of five international experts will define the land and maritime border and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it sees as its own.
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Original:  The panel of five international experts will define the  land and maritime border and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it sees as its own.
Revised:  The panel of five international experts will define the new land and maritime border and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it sees as its own.
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Original:  The panel of five international experts will define the  land and maritime border and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it sees as its own.
Revised:  The panel of five international experts will define the land and maritime borders and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it sees as its own.
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Original:  The panel of five international experts will define the  land and maritime border and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it sees as its own.
Revised:  The panel of five international experts will define the land and maritime border and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it views as its own.
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Original:   Slovenia, which has a much shorter coastline, feared  this would deny its ships direct passage to international waters.
Revised:  However, Slovenia, which has a much shorter coastline, feared this would deny its ships direct passage to international waters.
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Original:   Slovenia, which has a much shorter coastline, feared  this would deny its ships direct passage to international waters.
Revised:  Slovenia, which has a much shorter coastline, feared that this would deny its ships direct passage to international waters.
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Original:  The EU and Washington welcomed the deal.
Revised:  Brussels and Washington welcomed the deal.
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Original:  The Border Arbitration Agreement allows for international arbitrators to resolve a  border dispute that dates back nearly 20 years to the break-up of Yugoslavia.
Revised:  The Border Arbitration Agreement allows for international arbitrators to resolve a 20 year border dispute that dates back nearly 20 years to the break-up of Yugoslavia.
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Original:  The Border Arbitration Agreement allows for international arbitrators to resolve a  border dispute that dates back nearly 20 years to the break-up of Yugoslavia.
Revised:  The Border Arbitration Agreement allows for international arbitrators to resolve a border dispute that dates back to the break-up of Yugoslavia.
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Original:  He was pronounced dead at the scene of the incident  
Revised:  He was pronounced dead at the scene of the incident . 
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Original:  Aaron Page had recently celebrated reaching eight years of age and was with twenty-five members of his family when he made his way into the River Wharfe, close to the civil parish of Bolton Abbey in the market town of Skipton, at approximately 1500 BST on Saturday.
Revised:  Aaron Page had recently celebrated reaching eight years of age and was with twenty-five members of his family when he made his way into the river, near Skipton, at approximately 1500 BST on Saturday.
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Original:  According to Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate Police : "No matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
Revised:  According to Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate police : "No matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
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Original: An eight-year-old boy has died after falling into a river in North Yorkshire, England.
Revised: An eight-year-old boy died after falling into a river in North Yorkshire, England.
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Original:  The River Wharfe is deep and has a substantial undercurrent.
Revised:  The 
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