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Original: Kiribati, one of the worlds most isolated nations has received tens of thousands of dollars in emergency food aid from the World Bank . Lying on the equator the South pacific country hosts some of the worlds least developed communities, with few natural resources they rely heavily on imports.
Revised: Kiribati, one of the worlds most isolated nations has received tens of thousands of dollars in emergency food aid from the World Bank . Lying on the equator the country hosts some of the worlds least developed communities, with few natural resources they rely heavily on imports.
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Original: Kiribati, one of the worlds most isolated nations has received tens of thousands of dollars in emergency food aid from the World Bank . Lying on the equator the South pacific country hosts some of the worlds least developed communities, with few natural resources they rely heavily on imports.
Revised: Kiribati, one of the worlds most isolated nations has received tens of thousands of dollars in emergency food aid from the World Bank . Lying on the equator the South pacific country hosts some of the worlds least developed communities, with few natural resources and relying heavily on imports.
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Original:  With the Global food crisis pushing food prices through the roof the people of this isolated region are struggling to cope, spending half of their income on food.
Revised:  With the global food crisis pushing food prices through the roof the people of this isolated region are struggling to cope, spending half of their income on food.
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Original:  The World Bank plans to send US 2 million worth of emergency aid that will provide for approximately 60\% of the population, 60,000 people.
Revised:  The World Bank plans to send 2 million worth of emergency aid that will provide for approximately 60\% of the population, 60,000 people.
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Original: The lack of skilled workers and being so geographically isolated has hindered the country's exports, with  one fifth of the area's income coming from foreign aid and similar amounts from tourism.
Revised: Little skilled workforce and being so geographically isolated has hindered the country's exports, with one fifth of the area's income coming from foreign aid and similar amounts from tourism.
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Original: Kiribati, one of the worlds most isolated nations has received tens of thousands of dollars in emergency food aid from the . Lying on the equator the country hosts some of the worlds least developed communities, with few natural resources and relying heavily on imports.
Revised: Kiribati, one of the worlds most isolated nations has received 
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Original: Kiribati, one of the worlds most isolated nations, has received US$2 million in emergency food aid from the World Bank.
Revised: Kiribati, one of the world's most isolated nations, has received US$2 million in emergency food aid from the World Bank.
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Original:  This is the second recent grant to Kiribati from the World Bank following a US$    20 million allowance given in March to devise applications to deal with the effects of climate change
Revised:  This is the second recent grant to Kiribati from the World Bank following a US$ This is the second recent grant to Kiribati from the World Bank following a US 20 million allowance given in March to devise applications to deal with the effects of climate change
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Original:  This is the second recent grant to Kiribati from the World Bank following a US$    20 million allowance given in March to devise applications to deal with the effects of climate change
Revised:  This is the second recent grant to Kiribati from the World Bank following a US$ 20 million allowance given in March to devise applications to deal with the effects of 
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Original:  However, it is not banned as a weapon, and the 1980 Convention on Conventional Weapons (Protocol III) simply disallows the use of incendiary weapons against civilian populations.
Revised:  However, 
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Original: Last week a documentary was aired by Italy's state-run RAI24 news television which alleged that the U.S.A. used white phosphorous shells in a "massive and indiscriminate way" against Iraqi civilians  .
Revised: A documentary aired by Italy's state-run RAI24 news television which alleged that the U.S.A. used white phosphorous shells in a "massive and indiscriminate way" against Iraqi civilians .
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Original:  The U.S. State department initially denied that white phospherous was used as weaponry, but American military officials have now admitted to using it as a weapon in Fallujah.
Revised:  The U.S. State department initially denied that white phospherous was used as weaponry, but 
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Original:  Barry Venable said that white phosphorous was used as an incendiary weapon against enemy combatants , however he said that "It was not used against civilians . " The US Military estimated that upto a 100,000 civilians were in Fallujah when US forces launched thier assault on it.
Revised:  Barry Venable said that white phosphorous was used as an incendiary weapon against enemy combatants . "It was not used against civilians . " The US Military estimated that upto a 100,000 civilians were in Fallujah when US forces launched thier assault on it.
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Original:  Barry Venable said that white phosphorous was used as an incendiary weapon against enemy combatants , however he said that "It was not used against civilians . " The US Military estimated that upto a 100,000 civilians were in Fallujah when US forces launched thier assault on it.
Revised:  Barry Venable said that white phosphorous was used as an incendiary weapon against enemy combatants , however he said that "It was not used against civilians , " The US Military estimated that upto a 100,000 civilians were in Fallujah when US forces launched thier assault on it.
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Original:  He referred reporters to the March-April 2005 edition of the U.S. Army's Field Artillery magazine .
Revised:  The Pentagon briefing directed reporters to the March-April 2005 edition of the U.S. Army's Field Artillery magazine .
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Original:  The magazine's authors used the shorthand ]  " WP " when talking about white phosphorous.
Revised:  The magazine's authors used the shorthand insurgents] " WP " when talking about white phosphorous.
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Original:  The magazine's authors used the shorthand ]  " WP " when talking about white phosphorous.
Revised:  The magazine's authors used the shorthand ] out " WP " when talking about white phosphorous.
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Original:  The magazine's authors used the shorthand ]  " WP " when talking about white phosphorous.
Revised:  The magazine's authors used the shorthand ] " WP " 
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Original:  "We used it for screening missions at two breeches and , later in the fight, as a potent psychological weapon against the insurgents in trench lines. ..
Revised:  "We used it for screening missions at two breeches and , later in the fight, as a potent psychological weapon against the insurgents in trench lines. 
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Original:  From US Army Field Manual : " ...
Revised:  , as the high temperature combustion causes "pillaring" of the smoke column. But the smoke does contain phosphoric acid and traces of unburned phosphorous, which is corrosive to human tissue (internally and externally.) The US Army Field Manual : " ...
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Original:  From US Army Field Manual : " ...
Revised:  From US Army Field Manual cautions " ...
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Original: Related news White phosphorous burns through all layers of human skin and muscle to the bone.
Revised: Related White phosphorous burns through all layers of human skin and muscle to the bone.
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Original:  However, General George Casey's 8 November 2004 briefing estimated the number of civilians still in Fallujah as between 20 000 and 100 000 civilians.
Revised:  General George Casey's 8 November 2004 briefing estimated the number of civilians still in Fallujah as between 20 000 and 100 000 civilians.
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Original:  Embedded Journalist Darrin Mortenson, who was with U.S. troops during the operation in Fallujah, already reported in April 2004 that a mortar team leader "directed his men to fire round after round of high explosives and white phosphorus charges into the city Friday and Saturday , never knowing what the targets were or what damage the resulting explosions caused.
Revised:  Embedded Journalist Darrin Mortenson, who was with U.S. troops during the operation in Fallujah, already reported in April 2004 that a mortar team leader "directed his men to fire round after round of high explosives and white phosphorus charges into the city Friday and Saturday 
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Original:  "  The U.S. State department initially denied that white phosphorus was used as weaponry, but Pentagon spokesman, Lt. Col.
Revised:  " . The U.S. State department initially denied that white phosphorus was used as weaponry, but Pentagon spokesman, Lt. Col.
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Original:  General George Casey's 8 November 2004 briefing estimated the number of civilians still in Fallujah as between 20  000 and 100  000 civilians.
Revised:  General George Casey's 8 November 2004 briefing estimated the number of civilians still in Fallujah as between 20 , 000 and 100 000 civilians.
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Original:  General George Casey's 8 November 2004 briefing estimated the number of civilians still in Fallujah as between 20  000 and 100  000 civilians.
Revised:  General George Casey's 8 November 2004 briefing estimated the number of civilians still in Fallujah as between 20 000 and 100 , 000 civilians.
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Original:  White phosphorous burns at temperatures near 5  000 degrees Fahrenheit (2760 C).
Revised:  White phosphorous burns at temperatures near 5 , 000 degrees Fahrenheit (2760 C).
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Original:  It is used to start fires but cause severe burns where it strikes humans.
Revised:  It is used to start fires and can cause severe burns where it strikes humans.
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Original:  But an official at called on police to say how the software would be used.
Revised:  But an official at called on police to explain how the software would be used.
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Original: campaigners have reacted angrily to the announcement that the largest police force in Britain has purchased a revolutionary computer system which will allow them to track everything a person does online on a graphic.
Revised: campaigners have reacted angrily to the announcement that the largest police force in Britain has purchased a revolutionary computer system which will allow them to track everything a person does online in a graphic.
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Original:  The service, responsible for policing London, has announced the purchase of , a computer programme which can correlate together information from satellites, mobile phones, websites, and financial transactions.
Revised:  The service, responsible for policing London, announced the purchase of , a computer programme which can correlate together information from satellites, mobile phones, websites, and financial transactions.
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Original:  The service, responsible for policing London, has announced the purchase of , a computer programme which can correlate together information from satellites, mobile phones, websites, and financial transactions.
Revised:  The service, responsible for policing London, has announced the purchase of , a computer program which can correlate together information from satellites, mobile phones, websites, and financial transactions.
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Original:  The service, responsible for policing London, has announced the purchase of , a computer programme which can correlate together information from satellites, mobile phones, websites, and financial transactions.
Revised:  The service, responsible for policing London, has announced the purchase of , a computer programme which can correlate information from satellites, mobile phones, websites, and financial transactions.
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Original:  It is already used by the .
Revised:  The software is already used by the .
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Original:  But lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, which has been likened to a computer programme in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters  raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, and endanger the democratic rights of demonstrators.
Revised:  Lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, which has been likened to a computer programme in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, and endanger the democratic rights of demonstrators.
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Original:  But lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, which has been likened to a computer programme in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters  raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, and endanger the democratic rights of demonstrators.
Revised:  But lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, likened to a computer programme in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, and endanger the democratic rights of demonstrators.
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Original:  But lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, which has been likened to a computer programme in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters  raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, and endanger the democratic rights of demonstrators.
Revised:  But lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, which has been likened to a computer program in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, and endanger the democratic rights of demonstrators.
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Original:  But lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, which has been likened to a computer programme in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters  raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, and endanger the democratic rights of demonstrators.
Revised:  But lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, which has been likened to a computer programme in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters , raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, and endanger the democratic rights of demonstrators.
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Original:  But lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, which has been likened to a computer programme in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters  raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, and endanger the democratic rights of demonstrators.
Revised:  But lawyers and campaigners have questioned whether innocent individuals may be tracked by the software, which has been likened to a computer programme in the film . Sarah McSherry, a lawyer representing a number of protesters raised fears officers could breach data protection laws by tracking innocent protesters, endangering the democratic rights of demonstrators.
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Original:  A product director at the parent company, , said the programme was available to purchase commercially.
Revised:  A product director at the parent company, , said the program is available to purchase commercially.
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Original:  A number of academics and intelligence experts have said the programme could lead to more convictions in terrorism and organised crime investigations, with one professor describing its use as "absolutely right."
Revised:  A number of academics and intelligence experts have said the program could lead to more convictions in terrorism and organised crime investigations, with one professor describing its use as "absolutely right."
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Original:  But an official at called on police to explain how the software would be used.
Revised:  In contract, an official at called on police to explain how the software would be used.
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Original:  The Metropolitan Police have not yet confirmed how the computer system will be used, but they are researching numerous possibilites ;
Revised:  The Metropolitan Police have not yet confirmed how the computer system will be used, but they are researching numerous possibilities ;
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Original:  a spokesperson said they were still assessing whether they would permenantly use the technology but declined to confirm how much it cost
Revised:  a spokesperson said they were still assessing whether they would permanently use the technology but declined to confirm how much it cost
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Original:  In contract , an official at called on police to explain how the software would be used.
Revised:  In contrast , an official at called on police to explain how the software would be used.
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Original:  The most recent controversy to emerge came last week after an elderly man with no criminal record was given permission to take legal action against senior officers who systematically recorded details of his attendance at peaceful protests to the .
Revised:  The most recent controversy to emerge came last week after an elderly man with no criminal record was given permission to take senior officers who systematically recorded details of his attendance at peaceful protests to the .
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Original:  The model, who was more than 6ft tall and weighed over 300 pounds was taken back into hospital over she felt dizzy where she later die 
Revised:  The model, who was more than 6ft tall and weighed over 300 pounds was taken back into hospital over she felt dizzy where she later died. 
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Original:  Anyone else would have given up, but Mia remained steadfast in her career, knowing that she was not just doing it for her own benefit, but for women of all ages  
Revised:  Anyone else would have given up, but Mia remained steadfast in her career, knowing that she was not just doing it for her own benefit, but for women of all ages ." 
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Original: 200px|Davis died in Los Angeles Mia Amber Davis, the American plus-size model and actress has died at the age of 36.
Revised: 200px|Davis died in Los Angeles Mia Amber Davis, the American plus-size model and actress has died at the age of 36 in Los Angeles.
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Original:  She played a heavyset woman named Rhonda who seduces a geek played by DJ Quall
Revised:  She played a heavyset woman named Rhonda who seduces a geek played by DJ Qualls
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Original: 200px|Davis died in Los Angeles Mia Amber Davis, the American plus-size model and actress  has died at the age of 36 in Los Angeles  . Davis, who appeared in the film Road Trip died a day after she had routine knee surgery.
Revised: 200px|Davis died in Los Angeles American plus-size model and actress has died at the age of 36 in Los Angeles . Davis, who appeared in the film Road Trip died a day after she had routine knee surgery.
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Original: 200px|Davis died in Los Angeles Mia Amber Davis, the American plus-size model and actress  has died at the age of 36 in Los Angeles  . Davis, who appeared in the film Road Trip died a day after she had routine knee surgery.
Revised: 200px|Davis died in Los Angeles Mia Amber Davis, the American plus-size model and actress Mia Amber Davis has died at the age of 36 in Los Angeles . Davis, who appeared in the film Road Trip died a day after she had routine knee surgery.
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Original: 200px|Davis died in Los Angeles Mia Amber Davis, the American plus-size model and actress  has died at the age of 36 in Los Angeles  . Davis, who appeared in the film Road Trip died a day after she had routine knee surgery.
Revised: 200px|Davis died in Los Angeles Mia Amber Davis, the American plus-size model and actress has died at the age of 36 in Los Angeles . Davis, who appeared in the film Road Trip , died one day after undergoing routine knee surgery.
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Original:  The model, who was more than 6ft tall and weighed over 300 pounds was taken back into hospital over she felt dizzy where she later died .
Revised:  Davis was more than 6ft tall and weighed over 300 pounds was taken back into hospital over she felt dizzy where she later died .
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Original:  Michael Yard, Davis' s husband was in New York at the time of her death.
Revised:  Michael Yard, Davis' husband, was in New York at the time of her death.
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Original:  He spoke to TMZ saying "I want to know what happened to my wife."
Revised:  He spoke to TMZ , saying, "I want to know what happened to my wife."
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Original:  Davis was having the surgery after a prolonged basketball injury from her college days.
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Original:  As well as modeling herself, Davis was also the editor of Plus Model Magazine.
Revised:  Davis was also the editor of Plus Model Magazine.
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Original:  Editor Madeline Jones commented on Davis' s death in a blog saying "Mia was a super model and industry leader because it was her love for the women she represented that kept pushing her when the industry itself did not embrace her.
Revised:  Editor Madeline Jones commented on Davis' death in a blog saying "Mia was a super model and industry leader because it was her love for the women she represented that kept pushing her when the industry itself did not embrace her.
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Original:  Editor Madeline Jones commented on Davis' s death in a blog saying "Mia was a super model and industry leader because it was her love for the women she represented that kept pushing her when the industry itself did not embrace her.
Revised:  Editor Madeline Jones commented on Davis' s death in a blog post, writing, "Mia was a super model and industry leader because it was her love for the women she represented that kept pushing her when the industry itself did not embrace her.
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Original:  Davis is best remembered for her appearence in the film Road Trip.
Revised:  Davis is best remembered for her appearance in Road Trip.
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Original: 200px| Davis died in Los Angeles American plus-size model and actress Mia Amber Davis has died at the age of 36 in Los Angeles, California.
Revised:  Davis died in Los Angeles American plus-size model and actress Mia Amber Davis has died at the age of 36 in Los Angeles, California.
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Original: Facebook hired a law firm to systematically discredit Google by paying two journalists to plant negative pieces in U.S. newspapers, leaked correspondance discloses.
Revised: Facebook hired a law firm to systematically discredit Google by paying two journalists to plant negative pieces in U.S. newspapers, leaked correspondence discloses.
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Original:  The new revelations are likely to increase tension between the two companies, who are already fierce rivals   
Revised:  The new revelations are likely to increase tension between the two companies, who are already fierce rivals . 
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