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Original: Home Secretary Theresa May made a statement on the incident to the House of Commons on Thursday 3 June.
Revised: Home Secretary Theresa May is due to make a statement on the incident to the House of Commons on Thursday 3 June.
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Original: File:EnglandCumbria.png|Location of Cumbria within England.
Revised: File:EnglandCumbria.png|Location of within England.
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Original:  ]] Police have found the body of a man they had been hunting in Cumbria , United Kingdom for a series of shootings.
Revised:  ]] Police have found the body of a man they had been hunting in , United Kingdom for a series of shootings.
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Original:  Shots were fired in Whitehaven, Seascale and Egremont ,  with a total of thirty different crime scenes.
Revised:  Shots were fired in , with a total of thirty different crime scenes.
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Original:  The Sellafield nuclear reprocessing plant was locked down for the first time in its history.
Revised:  The nuclear reprocessing plant was locked down for the first time in its history.
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Original:  The first of Bird's victims was a fellow taxi driver shot in Whitehaven at about 10.30 local time, with the following victims being shot at random as Bird drove down the west coast.
Revised:  The first of Bird's victims was a fellow taxi driver shot in at about 10.30 local time, with the following victims being shot at random as Bird drove down the west coast.
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Original:  Home Secretary Theresa May is due to make a statement on the incident to the House of Commons tomorrow  
Revised:  Home Secretary Theresa May is due to make a statement on the incident to the House of Commons tomorrow . 
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Original:  The man is accused of presenting false documents and immigration violations and is currently being held in Serbia  
Revised:  The man is accused of presenting false documents and immigration violations and is currently being held in Serbia . 
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Original: Recent images from the Chandra X-Ray Observatory reveal details of the nature of the star that become Supernova 1987A.
Revised: Recent images from the Chandra X-Ray Observatory reveal details of the nature of the star that became Supernova 1987A.
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Original: A Claude Giroux goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the Philadelphia Flyers to a 4–3 victory for the Chicago Blackhawks in Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
Revised: A Claude Giroux goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the Philadelphia Flyers to a 4–3 victory over the Chicago Blackhawks in Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
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Original:  The Flyers victory cuts the Blackhawk' series league to 2–1.
Revised:  The Flyers victory cuts the Blackhawks' series lead to 2–1.
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Original:       The Flyers hit first -- converting on their first power play chance -- when right-winger Danny Brière, who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
Revised:  "I tried to get a stick on it, and it just trickled in," Giroux said. "Our line started playing well, so anytime your line's going you just play better I think. The whole team just showed up tonight, and we really wanted that win. The Flyers hit first -- converting on their first power play chance -- when right-winger Danny Brière, who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
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Original:       The Flyers hit first -- converting on their first power play chance -- when right-winger Danny Brière, who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
Revised:  The Flyers hit first — converting on their first power play chance -- when right-winger Danny Brière, who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
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Original:       The Flyers hit first -- converting on their first power play chance -- when right-winger Danny Brière, who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
Revised:  The Flyers hit first -- converting on their first power play chance — when right-winger Danny Brière, who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
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Original:       The Flyers hit first -- converting on their first power play chance -- when right-winger Danny Brière, who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
Revised:  The Flyers hit first -- converting on their first power play chance -- when right-winger Danny Brière, who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
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Original:  Leading up to the play, Blackhawk Marián Hossa has been sent to the penalty box for slashing, breaking the stick of a Flyer player.
Revised:  Leading up to the play, Blackhawk Marián Hossa has been sent to the penalty box for slashing, breaking the stick of a Flyers player.
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Original:  The Blackhawks went right back down the ice and scored less than a minute after Byfuglien's penalty expired, with  Duncan Keith shot from midway into the offensive zone at the 2:49 mark.
Revised:  The Blackhawks went right back down the ice and scored less than a minute after Byfuglien's penalty expired, with a Duncan Keith shot from midway into the offensive zone at the 2:49 mark.
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Original:  After a further 1:26 of game time, play finally stopped on an icing call.
Revised:  After a further 1:26 of game time, play finally stopped after an icing call.
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Original:  After a stoppage in play, John Madden won the puck  passed it back to Brent Sopel, who shot a one-timer  into the far corner of the net to tie the game at the 17:52 mark of the second period.
Revised:  After a stoppage in play, John Madden won the puck and passed it back to Brent Sopel, who shot a one-timer into the far corner of the net to tie the game at the 17:52 mark of the second period.
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Original:  The third period began with a goal flurry.
Revised:  The third period began with a goal-scoring flurry.
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Original:  At the 5:03 mark of the overtime period, a Flyers shot hit of the goal post and  down the line and  Niemi was able to secure the puck only for a Flyers player to knock the stick into the back of the net .
Revised:  At the 5:03 mark of the overtime period, a Flyers shot hit of the goal post and trickled down the line and Niemi was able to secure the puck only for a Flyers player to knock the stick into the back of the net .
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Original:  The arena staff blew the horn signaling a home goal , but upon video review, the no goal was awarded with the game officials determining that the whistle signaling stoppage of play had been blown  .
Revised:  The arena staff blew the horn signaling a home goal , but upon video review, a no-goal was awarded with the game officials determining that the whistle signaling stoppage of play had been blown .
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Original:  "We came out and played hard . " Richards said.
Revised:  "We came out and played hard , " Richards said.
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Original: At the 5:03 mark of the overtime period, a Flyers shot hit of the goal post and trickled down the line and before Niemi was able to secure the puck briefly.
Revised: At the 5:03 mark of the overtime period, a Flyers shot hit off the goal post and trickled down the line and before Niemi was able to secure the puck briefly.
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Original:  A Flyers player managed to knock the stick into the back of the net, but upon video review, a no-goal was awarded with the game officials determining that the whistle signaling stoppage of play had been blown before the puck had been knocked loose.
Revised:  A Flyers player managed to knock the puck into the back of the net, but upon video review, a no-goal was awarded with the game officials determining that the whistle signaling stoppage of play had been blown before the puck had been knocked loose.
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Original:  Both teams had three power-play opportunities, all six of which occured in the first two periods of play.
Revised:  Both teams had three power-play opportunities, all six of which occurred in the first two periods of play.
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Original: "I think that people should get off their high horse and take a reality check," Said Liberal backbencher Bob Baldwin, who beleves the word should be treated as a badge of honour.
Revised: "I think that people should get off their high horse and take a reality check," Said Liberal backbencher Bob Baldwin, who believes the word should be treated as a badge of honour.
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Original: Australian Labor Party MP Tanya Plibersek said the ban was un-australian "I can't tell you how offended I am by this,"  while reaction from the Liberals and Nationals was mixed.
Revised: Australian Labor Party MP Tanya Plibersek said the ban was un-Australian. "I can't tell you how offended I am by this," while reaction from the Liberals and Nationals was mixed.
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Original:  "I think that people should get off their high horse and take a reality check," Said Liberal backbencher Bob Baldwin, who believes the word should be treated as a badge of honour.
Revised:  "I think that people should get off their high horse and take a reality check," said Liberal backbencher Bob Baldwin, who believes the word should be treated as a badge of honour.
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Original:  Maffra is likely to hold top spot on percentage, at least, before they have their first bye.
Revised:  Maffra hold top spot on percentage, at least, before they have their first bye.
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Original:  Maffra is likely to hold top spot on percentage, at least, before they have their first bye.
Revised:  Maffra is likely to hold top spot ahead of they have their first bye.
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Original:  Several more Muslim youth were being questioned by the police for suspected involvement
Revised:  Several more Muslim youths were being questioned by the police for suspected involvement
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Original:  Several more Muslim youths were being questioned by the police for suspected involvement      [   
Revised:  Several more Muslim youths were being questioned by the police for suspected involvement . [ 
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Original:  Several more Muslim youths were being questioned by the police for suspected involvement.
Revised:  Several youths were being questioned by the police for suspected involvement.
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Original: A 17-year old syrian-born youth was killed and his 19-year old brother seriously injured on Thursday August 18, 2005 by a bomb they are suspected of having been building in their Oslo flat.
Revised: A 17-year old syrian-born youth was killed and his 19-year old brother seriously injured on Thursday by a bomb they are suspected of having been building in their Oslo flat.
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Original: A 17-year old syrian-born youth was killed and his 19-year old brother seriously injured on Thursday by a bomb they are suspected of having been building in their Oslo flat.
Revised: A 17-year old Syrian-born youth was killed and his 19-year old brother seriously injured on Thursday by a bomb they are suspected of having been building in their Oslo flat.
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Original:  This week, oil production is just 1.6 million barrels per day.
Revised:  This week, oil production is 1.6 million barrels per day.
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Original:  Even neighboring Iran pays more at the pump that Iraq;
Revised:  Even neighboring Iran pays more at the pump than Iraq;
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Original:  The low cost  due in large part to generous pre-war government subsidies on petrolium products that remain in place today.
Revised:  The low cost is due in large part to generous pre-war government subsidies on petrolium products that remain in place today.
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Original:  This contrasts to averages of $2.55 in America, $6.24 in Great Britian .
Revised:  This contrasts to averages of $2.55 in America, $6.24 in Great Britain .
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Original:  Iraq's oil reserves are estimate to be nearly 115 billion barrels, the third largest in the world
Revised:  Iraq's oil reserves are estimated at nearly 115 billion barrels, the third largest in the world
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Original:  This took around four weeks to film and are one of Coronation Street’s biggest storylines this year  
Revised:  This took around four weeks to film and are one of Coronation Street’s biggest storylines this year . 
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Original: An episode on the British soap opera Coronation Street was postponed after it was due to air on the same day as the Cumbria shootings occurred.
Revised: An episode of the British soap opera Coronation Street was postponed after it was due to air on the same day as the Cumbria shootings occurred.
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Original: An episode on the British soap opera Coronation Street was postponed after it was due to air on the same day as the Cumbria shootings occurred.
Revised: An episode on the British soap opera Coronation Street was postponed after it was due to air on the same day as a string of shootings in Cumbria occurred.
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Original:  The soap was replaced with an episode of Harry Hill’s TV Burp was shown in Coronation Streets place .
Revised:  The soap was replaced with an episode of Harry Hill’s TV Burp .
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Original:  The gunman then continued to turn the gun on himself and commit suicide.
Revised:  The gunman then went on to turn the gun on himself and commit suicide.
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Original:  This one episode of Coronation Street is part of a six part collection of episodes.
Revised:  This episode of Coronation Street is part of a six part collection of episodes.
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Original:  This took around four weeks to film and are one of Coronation Street ’ s biggest storylines this year.
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Original:  This took around four weeks to film and are one of Coronation Street ’ s biggest storylines this year.
Revised:  This took around four weeks to film and are one of Coronation Street ' s biggest storylines this year.
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Original: An episode of the British soap opera Coronation Street was postponed after it was due to air on the same day as a string of shootings in Cumbria occurred.
Revised: An episode of the British soap opera Coronation Street has been postponed after it was due to air on the same day as a string of shootings in Cumbria occurred.
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Original:  The episode was shelved after a man shot dead 12 people and injured several more in Cumbria.
Revised:  The broadcast was shelved after a man shot dead 12 people and injured several more in Cumbria.
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Original:  The gunman then went on to turn the gun on himself and commit suicide.
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Original:  They took around four weeks to film and are one of Coronation Street's biggest storylines this year .
Revised:  They took around four weeks to film .
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Original: The explosion occurred as a gas truck was resupplying the hospital's gas tanks .
Revised: The explosion occurred as a truck was resupplying the hospital's gas tanks .
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Original:  All three are among the injured.
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Original:  Victims' relatives  and other bystanders  gathered at police cordons around the scene.
Revised:  Victims' relatives , and other bystanders gathered at police cordons around the scene.
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Original:  Victims' relatives  and other bystanders  gathered at police cordons around the scene.
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Original:  The name refers to its large head and mouth, used to filter and other small food from the ocean.
Revised:  Their name refers to its large head and mouth, used to filter and other small food from the ocean.
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Original:  In truth megamouths have more than fifty rows of teeth.
Revised:  In truth megamouths can have up to fifty rows of teeth.
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Original: In another Gaza town, Kfar Darom, protesters are also making their last stand in a synagogue, and thousands of troops have surrounded the buildings.
Revised: In another Gaaza town, Kfar Darom, protesters are also making their last stand in a synagogue, and thousands of troops have surrounded the buildings.
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Original:  Details were made public by Chris Lewis, the Regional Vice President of Xbox across Europe,  Middle East and Africa, in an interview with the console's official website, Xbox.com.
Revised:  Details were made public by Chris Lewis, the Regional Vice President of Xbox across Europe, the Middle East and Africa, in an interview with the console's official website, Xbox.com.
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Original:  At the half, Kobe Bryant told ABC Sports , that the team done okay in the first half.
Revised:  At the half, Bryant told ABC Sports , that the team done okay in the first half.
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Original:  At the half, Kobe Bryant told ABC Sports , that the team done okay in the first half.
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Original:  With 28 seconds left in the quarter, Ron Artest hit a three-pointer to put Los Angeles up 84–64.
Revised:  With 28 seconds left in the quarter, Artest hit a three-pointer to put Los Angeles up 84–64.
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Original:  Bryant had 14 points in the quarter    .
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Original: The first quarter was fairly evenly matched, ending 26-21 in favor of the Lakers.
Revised: The first quarter was fairly evenly matched, ending 26–21 in favor of the Lakers.
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Original:  At one point the Lakers were up 16-10 , but Boston was able to close to within one point.
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Original:  Kobe Bryant hit a three-pointer late in the fourth quarter to lift the Los Angeles Lakers to a 102–89 victory over the Boston Celtics in Game 1 of the 2010 NBA Finals Thursday night in Los Angeles, California on the West Coast of the United States.
Revised: In basketball, Kobe Bryant hit a three-pointer late in the fourth quarter to lift the Los Angeles Lakers to a 102–89 victory over the Boston Celtics in Game 1 of the 2010 NBA Finals Thursday night in Los Angeles, California on the West Coast of the United States.
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Original: In basketball, Kobe Bryant hit a three-pointer late in the fourth quarter to lift the Los Angeles Lakers to a 102–89 victory over the Boston Celtics in Game 1 of the 2010 NBA Finals Thursday night in Los Angeles, California on the West Coast of the United States . Bryant scored 30 points in the game to lead all scorers.
Revised: In basketball, Kobe Bryant hit a three-pointer late in the fourth quarter to lift the Los Angeles Lakers to a 102–89 victory over the Boston Celtics in Game 1 of the 2010 NBA Finals Thursday night in Los Angeles, California . Bryant scored 30 points in the game to lead all scorers.
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Original: "We blew a couple of assignments," Bryan , who had 12 points in the half, said of the Celtics defense.
Revised: "We blew a couple of assignments," Bryant , who had 12 points in the half, said of the Celtics defense.
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Original:  File:Kobe Bryant Washington.jpg|Kobe Bryant scored 30 points in Game 1 of the 2010 NBA Finals.
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Original:  File:Kobe Bryant Washington.jpg|Kobe Bryant scored 30 points in Game 1 of the 2010 NBA Finals.
Revised:  File:Kobe Bryant Washington.jpg|Kobe Bryant scored 30 points in Game 1 of the .
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Original:  Bryant was backed-up by a 23-point, 14-rebound effort from Pau Gosol and 15 points from Ron Artest .
Revised:  Bryant was backed-up by a 23-point, 14-rebound effort from and 15 points from Ron Artest .
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Original:  Bryant was backed-up by a 23-point, 14-rebound effort from Pau Gosol and 15 points from Ron Artest .
Revised:  Bryant was backed-up by a 23-point, 14-rebound effort from Pau Gosol and 15 points from .
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Original:  For Boston, Paul Pierce had 24 points and Kevin Garnett had 16 points.
Revised:  For Boston, had 24 points and Kevin Garnett had 16 points.
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Original:  With just two tenths of a second on the clock, Boston's Rajon Rondo hit a three-pointer to bring the score to within nine: 50–41.
Revised:  With just two tenths of a second on the clock, Boston's hit a three-pointer to bring the score to within nine: 50–41.
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Original:  The Minneapolis Lakers first appeared in the Basketball Association of America -- the precursor to the NBA -- defeating the Washington Capitols 4–2.
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Original:  The Minneapolis Lakers first appeared in the Basketball Association of America -- the precursor to the NBA -- defeating the Washington Capitols 4–2.
Revised:  The Minneapolis Lakers first appeared in the Basketball Association of America -- the precursor to the NBA — defeating the Washington Capitols 4–2.
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Original:  In 1962, the Lakers -- now in Los Angeles -- met for the second time -- this time winning 4–3.
Revised:  In 1962, the Lakers — now in Los Angeles -- met for the second time -- this time winning 4–3.
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Original:  In 1962, the Lakers -- now in Los Angeles -- met for the second time -- this time winning 4–3.
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Original:  In 1962, the Lakers -- now in Los Angeles -- met for the second time -- this time winning 4–3.
Revised:  In 1962, the Lakers -- now in Los Angeles -- met for the second time — this time winning 4–3.
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Original:  It was not until the eighth meeting -- in 1985 -- did the Lakers win.
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Original:  It was not until the eighth meeting -- in 1985 -- did the Lakers win.
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Original:  The best-of-seven series resumes Sunday night at Los Angeles' Staples Center
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Original:  The current casualties follows the death of 25 in a previous fire on Tuesday  
Revised:  The current casualties follows the death of 25 in a previous fire on Tuesday . 
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