wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   upalt=Carter riding a bicycle|Carter in Plains, 2008 Health problems On August 3, 2015, Carter underwent an elective surgery to remove a small mass on his liver, and his prognosis for a full recovery was initially said to be excellent.
Revised:  upalt=Carter riding a bicycle|Carter in Plains, 2008On August 3, 2015, Carter underwent an elective surgery to remove a small mass on his liver, and his prognosis for a full recovery was initially said to be excellent.
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Original:  On May 13, 2019, Carter broke his hip during a fall at his Plains home and underwent surgery the same day at the Phoebe Sumter Medical Center in Americus, Georgia.
Revised:  On May 13, 2019, Carter broke his hip at his Plains home and underwent surgery the same day at the Phoebe Sumter Medical Center in Americus, Georgia.
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Original:  On October 1, 2019, Carter became the first U.S. president to live to the age of at least 95.
Revised:  On October 1, 2019, Carter became the first U.S. president to live to the age of 95.
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Original:  He is also the five oldest living person to have served as a world leader.
Revised:  He is also the fifth oldest living person to have served as a world leader.
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Original: An attempted coup d'état occurred in Cameroon in 1984 ;
Revised: An attempted coup d'état occurred in Cameroon in 1984 , when
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Original:  presidential palace guards unsuccessfully tried to overthrow President Paul Biya , resulting in fighting that began on April 6, 1984, and ended several days later.
Revised:  presidential palace guards unsuccessfully tried to overthrow President Paul Biya . The fighting that resulted began on April 6, 1984, and ended several days later.
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Original:  The prosecution asked for the death penalty but when all were found guilty, jail sentences were handed out with du Toit receiving  34 years (to be served in Malabo's notorious Black Beach URL His job in the coup d'état was reportedly to supply the mercenaries with arms including AK-47s, RPGs, PK machine guns , and mortars, and to secure the control tower at the Malabo airport and change the frequency to establish communication with the incoming plane from Zimbabwe carrying more mercenaries.
Revised:  The prosecution asked for the death penalty but when all were found guilty, with du Toit receiving 34 years (to be served in Malabo's notorious Black Beach URL His job in the coup d'état was reportedly to supply the mercenaries with arms including AK-47s, RPGs, PK machine guns , and mortars, and to secure the control tower at the Malabo airport and change the frequency to establish communication with the incoming plane from Zimbabwe carrying more mercenaries.
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Original:  The prosecution asked for the death penalty but when all were found guilty, jail sentences were handed out with du Toit receiving  34 years (to be served in Malabo's notorious Black Beach URL His job in the coup d'état was reportedly to supply the mercenaries with arms including AK-47s, RPGs, PK machine guns , and mortars, and to secure the control tower at the Malabo airport and change the frequency to establish communication with the incoming plane from Zimbabwe carrying more mercenaries.
Revised:  The prosecution asked for the death penalty but when all were found guilty, jail sentences were handed out with du Toit receiving a sentence 34 years (to be served in Malabo's notorious Black Beach URL His job in the coup d'état was reportedly to supply the mercenaries with arms including AK-47s, RPGs, PK machine guns , and mortars, and to secure the control tower at the Malabo airport and change the frequency to establish communication with the incoming plane from Zimbabwe carrying more mercenaries.
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Original:  The prosecution asked for the death penalty but when all were found guilty, jail sentences were handed out with du Toit receiving  34 years (to be served in Malabo's notorious Black Beach URL His job in the coup d'état was reportedly to supply the mercenaries with arms including AK-47s, RPGs, PK machine guns , and mortars, and to secure the control tower at the Malabo airport and change the frequency to establish communication with the incoming plane from Zimbabwe carrying more mercenaries.
Revised:  The prosecution asked for the death penalty but when all were found guilty, jail sentences were handed out with du Toit receiving 34 years (to be served in Malabo's Black Beach URL His job in the coup d'état was reportedly to supply the mercenaries with arms including AK-47s, RPGs, PK machine guns , and mortars, and to secure the control tower at the Malabo airport and change the frequency to establish communication with the incoming plane from Zimbabwe carrying more mercenaries.
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Original:  The prosecution asked for the death penalty but when all were found guilty, jail sentences were handed out with du Toit receiving  34 years (to be served in Malabo's notorious Black Beach URL His job in the coup d'état was reportedly to supply the mercenaries with arms including AK-47s, RPGs, PK machine guns , and mortars, and to secure the control tower at the Malabo airport and change the frequency to establish communication with the incoming plane from Zimbabwe carrying more mercenaries.
Revised:  The prosecution asked for the death penalty but when all were found guilty, jail sentences were handed out with du Toit receiving 34 years (to be served in Malabo's notorious Black Beach URL His job in the coup d'état was reportedly to supply the mercenaries with arms including AK-47s, RPGs, PK machine guns and mortars, and to secure the control tower at the Malabo airport and change the frequency to establish communication with the incoming plane from Zimbabwe carrying more mercenaries.
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Original:  Niek Du Toit served five years and eight months of a 34-year sentence in a 5ft by 7ft (150cm x 210cm) cell and had been tortured, beaten, starved and kept for much of the time in solitary confinement.
Revised:  Niek Du Toit served five years and eight months of a 34-year sentence in a cell measuring 150 cm x 210 cm, had been tortured, beaten, starved and kept for much of the time in solitary confinement.
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Original:  They were burned with cigarettes, beaten with AK-47 rifle butts, hung upside down and beaten, contracted Malaria multiple times and was refused treatment, amongst many tortures endures by the 18 men.
Revised:  They were burned with cigarettes, beaten with AK-47 rifle butts, hung upside down and beaten, contracted malaria multiple times and was refused treatment, amongst many tortures endures by the 18 men.
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Original:  Simon Mann had bribed the prison guards to fetch food from the hotel across the street, claiming it was good enough for his co-conspirators but did not suit his delicate palate , he even had a treadmill installed in his prison cell while Niek and the others were handcuffed to the beds and beaten if they tried to move.
Revised:  Simon Mann had bribed the prison guards to fetch food from the hotel across the street, claiming it was good enough for his co-conspirators but not for him , he even had a treadmill installed in his prison cell while Niek and the others were handcuffed to the beds and beaten if they tried to move.
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Original: James Brabazon: My Friend the Mercenary, Grove Press ( March 22 , 2011), Biography of Nick du Toit.
Revised: James Brabazon: My Friend the Mercenary, Grove Press ( 22 , 2011), Biography of Nick du Toit.
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Original: Servaas Nicolaas "Niek" du Toit is a former South African arms dealer, former mercenary and former colonel of 32 Battalion and the 5th Reconnaissance Commando.
Revised: Servaas Nicolas "Niek" du Toit is a former South African arms dealer, former mercenary and former colonel of 32 Battalion and the 5th Reconnaissance Commando.
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Original: Microstimulation is a technique that stimulates a group of nerve cells by zapping them with a small electrical current  . Applications Microstimulation is used in neuroanatomical research to identify the functional significance of a group of neurons.
Revised: Microstimulation is a technique that stimulates a small population of neurons by passing a small electrical current . Applications Microstimulation is used in neuroanatomical research to identify the functional significance of a group of neurons.
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Original:  In this instance, the correlation between stimulation and behavior helped identify the function of these two subregions in the process of fear   .
Revised:  In this instance, the correlation between stimulation and behavior helped identify the function of these two subregions in the process of fear . .
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Original: Microstimulation is  being explored as a method to deliver sensory percepts to circumvent damaged sensory receptors or pathways.
Revised: Microstimulation is aa being explored as a method to deliver sensory percepts to circumvent damaged sensory receptors or pathways.
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Original:  Between 1964 and 1974, Elizabeth II visited Malta once  in November 1967.
Revised:  Between 1964 and 1974, Elizabeth II visited Malta once , in November 1967.
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Original:  Under the new Constitution of Malta, approved in a referendum held  May of that year, Queen Elizabeth II became Queen of Malta ().
Revised:  Under the new Constitution of Malta, approved in a referendum held in May of that year, Queen Elizabeth II became Queen of Malta ().
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Original: The State of Malta (), known in common parlance as Malta, was the predecessor to the modern-day Republic of Malta.
Revised: The State of Malta (), known in common speech as Malta, was the predecessor to the modern-day Republic of Malta.
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Original: The State of Malta (), known in common speech as Malta, was the predecessor to the modern-day Republic of Malta.
Revised: The State of Malta (), commonly known as Malta, was the predecessor to the modern-day Republic of Malta.
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Original:  Under the new Constitution of Malta, approved in a referendum held in May of that year, Queen Elizabeth II became Queen of Malta ().
Revised:  Under the new Constitution of Malta, approved in a referendum held in May of that year, Queen Elizabeth II became the queen of Malta ().
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Original:  Her constitutional roles were delegated to the Governor-General of Malta.
Revised:  Her constitutional roles were delegated to the governor-general of Malta.
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Original:  Governors-General The following Governors-General held office in Malta between 1964 and 1974:
Revised:  Governors-general The following governors-general held office in Malta between 1964 and 1974:
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Original:  Prime Ministers The following held office as Prime Minister (and head of government) of the State of Malta during this period: Transition to republic On 13 December 1974, following amendments to the Constitution by the Labour government of Dom Mintoff, the monarchy was abolished and Malta became a republic within the Commonwealth with the function of head of state vested in a president appointed by Parliament.
Revised:  Prime ministers The following held office as Prime Minister (and head of government) of the State of Malta during this period: Transition to republic On 13 December 1974, following amendments to the Constitution by the Labour government of Dom Mintoff, the monarchy was abolished and Malta became a republic within the Commonwealth with the function of head of state vested in a president appointed by Parliament.
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Original:  Prime Ministers The following held office as Prime Minister (and head of government) of the State of Malta during this period: Transition to republic On 13 December 1974, following amendments to the Constitution by the Labour government of Dom Mintoff, the monarchy was abolished and Malta became a republic within the Commonwealth with the function of head of state vested in a president appointed by Parliament.
Revised:  Prime Ministers The following held office as prime minister (and head of government) of the State of Malta during this period: Transition to republic On 13 December 1974, following amendments to the Constitution by the Labour government of Dom Mintoff, the monarchy was abolished and Malta became a republic within the Commonwealth with the function of head of state vested in a president appointed by Parliament.
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Original:  The last Governor-General , Sir Anthony Mamo, was appointed the first President of Malta.
Revised:  The last governor-general , Sir Anthony Mamo, was appointed the first President of Malta.
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Original:  The last Governor-General , Sir Anthony Mamo, was appointed the first President of Malta.
Revised:  The last Governor-General , Sir Anthony Mamo, was appointed the first president of Malta.
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Original: Awards and distinctions She is the first woman to cross seven seas.
Revised: Awards and distinctions First woman to cross seven seas.
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Original:  She twice swam the English Channel first in 1989 and again in 1999.
Revised:  Twice swam the English Channel first in 1989 and again in 1999.
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Original:  She was awarded the Arjuna Award in 1990.
Revised:  Arjuna Award in 1990.
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Original:  She was also awarded Padma Shri award. she was also awarded Tenzing Norgay lifetime adventure sports award Category:
Revised:  Padma Shri award. she was also awarded Tenzing Norgay lifetime adventure sports award Category:
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Original:  Swimming career Her first national competition, at age nine, she dominated her age group by winning six gold medals in six events.
Revised:  career Her first national competition, at age nine, she dominated her age group by winning six gold medals in six events.
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Original: Prince Mohammad bin Salman League players Category:Algerian expatriates in Finland Category:Algerian expatriates in France Category:Algerian expatriates in Spain Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Saudi Arabia Category:Algeria under-23 international footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Finland Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:Expatriate footballers in Spain Category:Expatriate footballers in Saudi Arabia Category:Association football midfielde
Revised: Prince Mohammad bin Salman League players Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Finland Category:Algerian expatriates in France Category:Algerian expatriates in Spain Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Saudi Arabia Category:Algeria under-23 international footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Finland Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:Expatriate footballers in Spain Category:Expatriate footballers in Saudi Arabia Category:Association football midfielde
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Original: Prince Mohammad bin Salman League players Category:Algerian expatriates in Finland Category:Algerian expatriates in France Category:Algerian expatriates in Spain Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Saudi Arabia Category:Algeria under-23 international footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Finland Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:Expatriate footballers in Spain Category:Expatriate footballers in Saudi Arabia Category:Association football midfielde
Revised: Prince Mohammad bin Salman League players Category:Algerian expatriates in Finland Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in France Category:Algerian expatriates in Spain Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Saudi Arabia Category:Algeria under-23 international footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Finland Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:Expatriate footballers in Spain Category:Expatriate footballers in Saudi Arabia Category:Association football midfielde
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Original: Prince Mohammad bin Salman League players Category:Algerian expatriates in Finland Category:Algerian expatriates in France Category:Algerian expatriates in Spain Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Saudi Arabia Category:Algeria under-23 international footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Finland Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:Expatriate footballers in Spain Category:Expatriate footballers in Saudi Arabia Category:Association football midfielde
Revised: Prince Mohammad bin Salman League players Category:Algerian expatriates in Finland Category:Algerian expatriates in France Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Spain Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Saudi Arabia Category:Algeria under-23 international footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Finland Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:Expatriate footballers in Spain Category:Expatriate footballers in Saudi Arabia Category:Association football midfielde
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Original: Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Finland Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in France Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Spain Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Saudi Arabia Category:Algeria under-23 international footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Finland Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:Expatriate footballers in Spain Category:Expatriate footballers in Saudi Arabia Category:Association football midfielde
Revised: Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Finland Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in France Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Spain Category:Algerian expatriate sportspeople in Saudi Arabia Category:Algeria under-23 international footballers Category:Expatriate footballers in Finland Category:Expatriate footballers in France Category:Expatriate footballers in Spain Category:Expatriate footballers in Saudi Arabia Category:Association football midfielders Category:21st-century Algerian peop
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Original:    Medical mission work in Taiwan was begun by the Dr. James Laidlaw Maxwell in 1865.
Revised:  Taiwan Medical mission work in Taiwan was begun by the Dr. James Laidlaw Maxwell in 1865.
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Original:  With time the expansion and growth of hospitals in China during the 1800s became more widely accepted.
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Original:  The Women's Foreign Missionary Society hoped alleviate the suffering of Chinese women by sending Dr. Lucinda L. Combs the first female missionary to Peking (Beijing) China in 1873.
Revised:  The Women's Foreign Missionary Society hoped alleviate the suffering of Chinese women by sending Dr. Lucinda L. Coombs the first female missionary to Peking (Beijing) China in 1873.
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Original:  A few showed no gratitude, thinking that they have rendered a service in allowing a foreigner to treat them .
Revised:  He explained that a few showed no gratitude, thinking that they have rendered a service in allowing a foreigner to treat them .
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Original:  Many had no desire to accept the religion of their doctors, but some did.
Revised:  Many had no desire to accept the religion of their doctors, though some did.
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Original:  Many patients converted to Christianity after they returned to their distant homes  .
Revised:  It was his belief that many patients converted to Christianity after they returned to their distant homes .
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Original:  This account paints an orientalism picture of the Chinese and their ingratitude to an assumed noble Christianity, which is indicative of Western beliefs of the times in regards to foreign nations and religions .
Revised:  This account paints an Orientalist picture of the Chinese and their ingratitude to an assumed noble Christianity, which is indicative of Western beliefs of the times in regards to foreign nations and religions .
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Original:  This account paints an orientalism picture of the Chinese and their ingratitude to an assumed noble Christianity, which is indicative of Western beliefs of the times in regards to foreign nations and religions .
Revised:  This account paints an orientalism picture of the Chinese and their ingratitude to an assumed noble Christianity, which is indicative of early Western paternalism in regards to foreign nations and religions .
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Original:  This account paints an orientalism picture of the Chinese and their ingratitude to an assumed noble Christianity, which is indicative of Western beliefs of the times in regards to foreign nations and religions .
Revised:  This account paints an orientalism picture of the Chinese and their ingratitude to an assumed noble Christianity, which is indicative of Western beliefs of the times in regards to the treatment of Asians .
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Original:  As the result of SLE, the cause of glomerulonephritis is said to be secondary  and has a different pattern and outcome from conditions with a primary cause originating in the kidney.
Revised:  Since it is a result of SLE, the cause of glomerulonephritis is said to be secondary and has a different pattern and outcome from conditions with a primary cause originating in the kidney.
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Original:  As the result of SLE, the cause of glomerulonephritis is said to be secondary  and has a different pattern and outcome from conditions with a primary cause originating in the kidney.
Revised:  As the result of SLE, this type of glomerulonephritis is said to be secondary and has a different pattern and outcome from conditions with a primary cause originating in the kidney.
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Original:  As the result of SLE, the cause of glomerulonephritis is said to be secondary  and has a different pattern and outcome from conditions with a primary cause originating in the kidney.
Revised:  As the result of SLE, the cause of glomerulonephritis is said to be secondary , and has a different pattern and outcome from conditions with a primary cause originating in the kidney.
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Original: Death of Faisal Algassab On April 14, 1965, a civilian named Faisal Algassab was the first person to be killed as a result of participation in the Intifada.
Revised: Deaths On April 14, 1965, a civilian named Faisal Algassab was the first person to be killed as a result of participation in the Intifada.
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Original:  He was being chased by armed police oficer Ahmad Alkhaloo who shot Algassab as he was returning to his residence, causing Algassab to scream in anguish, catching the attention of onlookers and spurring a large crowd at the scene.
Revised:  He was being chased by armed police officer Ahmad Alkhaloo who shot Algassab as he was returning to his residence, causing Algassab to scream in anguish, catching the attention of onlookers and spurring a large crowd at the scene.
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Original:  The uprising was sparked by the laying off of hundreds of Bahraini workers at the Bahrain Petroleum Company on March 5, 1965.
Revised:  The uprising was sparked by the laying-off of hundreds of Bahraini workers at the Bahrain Petroleum Company on March 5, 1965.
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Original:  Background and main events The uprising started when students of Manama High School, which then was the only high school in Bahrain, protested against the laying off of hundreds of workers at BAPCO (Bahrain Petroleum Company), however, the protest was quickly suppressed by the infantry.
Revised:  Background and main events The uprising started when students of Manama High School, which then was the only high school in Bahrain, protested against the laying-off of hundreds of workers at BAPCO (Bahrain Petroleum Company), however, the protest was quickly suppressed by the infantry.
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