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Original:  The iPod nano is the second model of the iPod family to utilize flash memory, second to the Shuffle . Apple also announced an iPod cell phone, the Motorola ROKR E1, which will be available exclusively from Cingular Wireless in the United States.
Revised:  The iPod nano is the second model of the iPod family to utilize flash memory, second to the Shuffle . Apple also announced an iTunes-compatible cell phone, the Motorola ROKR E1, which will be available exclusively from Cingular Wireless in the United States.
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Original:  Apple today unveiled its latest addition to the iPod line, the iPod nano.
Revised: iPod nano. Courtesy of Apple. Apple today unveiled its latest addition to the iPod line, the iPod nano.
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Original:  Along with a new look, it also features a customizable randomization and greater parental controls on songs with explicit lyrics in the iTunes Music Store as well as controlling content of Podcasts  
Revised:  Along with a new look, it also features a customizable randomization and greater parental controls on songs with explicit lyrics in the iTunes Music Store as well as controlling content of Podcasts . 
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Original:  University of Alberta (Edmonton, Alberta) - The University of Alberta extends its deepest sympathies to everyone who has experienced a loss from this disaster.
Revised:  (Edmonton, Alberta) - The University of Alberta extends its deepest sympathies to everyone who has experienced a loss from this disaster.
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Original:  The  spot included revellers smashing furniture, pouring beer down each other's throats, and women dancing topless .
Revised:  The heavly censored spot included revellers smashing furniture, pouring beer down each other's throats, and women dancing topless .
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Original: The German Anarchist Pogo Party ran a campaign ad which, instead of discussing the parties polotics , featured various party scenes set to a heavy metal soundtrack.
Revised: The German Anarchist Pogo Party ran a campaign ad which, instead of discussing the parties politics , featured various party scenes set to a heavy metal soundtrack.
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Original:  The heavly censored spot included revellers smashing furniture, pouring beer down each other's throats, and women dancing topless.
Revised:  The heavily censored spot included revellers smashing furniture, pouring beer down each other's throats, and women dancing topless.
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Original:  The heavily censored spot included revellers smashing furniture, pouring beer down each other's throats, and women dancing topless.
Revised:  The spot included revellers smashing furniture, pouring beer down each other's throats, and women dancing topless.
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Original:   The ad  has offended a number of people, but has likely gained the party nationwide attention among its younger demographics who could access campaign websites online (appd.de NSFW).
Revised:  The ad The ad has offended a number of people, but has likely gained the party nationwide attention among its younger demographics who could access campaign websites online (appd.de NSFW).
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Original:  Its next ad is scheduled for Monday night, although broadcasting authorities may further censor the ad.
Revised:  Its next ad is scheduled for Monday night, although broadcasting authorities may again censor the ad.
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Original:  The ad has offended a number of people, but has likely gained the party nationwide attention among its younger demographics who could access campaign websites online (appd.de -- NSFW ).
Revised:  The ad has offended a number of people, but has likely gained the party nationwide attention among its younger demographics who could access campaign websites online (appd.de ).
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Original: The United States third-largest airline operator - Delta will cut 1,000 jobs as a part of reducing service in its hub  Cincinnati.
Revised: The United States third-largest airline operator , Delta, will cut 1,000 jobs as a part of reducing service in its hub Cincinnati.
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Original: The United States third-largest airline operator - Delta will cut 1,000 jobs as a part of reducing service in its hub  Cincinnati.
Revised: The United States third-largest airline operator - Delta will cut 1,000 jobs as a part of reducing service in its hub , Cincinnati.
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Original:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 machines to an air-cargo company - ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircrafts in the fleet.
Revised:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 planes to an air-cargo company - ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircrafts in the fleet.
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Original:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 machines to an air-cargo company - ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircrafts in the fleet.
Revised:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 machines to an air-cargo company , ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircrafts in the fleet.
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Original:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 machines to an air-cargo company - ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircrafts in the fleet.
Revised:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 machines to an air-cargo company - ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircraft in the fleet.
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Original:  Delta will fly to 20 new 'business destinations' from Atlanta and Salt Lake City instead.
Revised:  Delta will fly to 20 new "business destinations" from Atlanta and Salt Lake City instead.
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Original:  The changes took place due to  extremaly difficult financial situation of the company.
Revised:  The changes took place due to the extremaly difficult financial situation of the company.
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Original:  It generated $10 billion in losses since 2001 and warned that it could file for bankruptcy if it did not lower the costs
Revised:  It generated $10 billion in losses since 2001 and warned that it could file for bankruptcy if it did not lower its costs
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Original: The United States  third-largest airline operator, Delta  , will cut 1,000 jobs as a part of reducing service in its hub, Cincinnati .
Revised: The United States ' third-largest airline operator, Delta , will cut 1,000 jobs as a part of reducing service in its hub, Cincinnati .
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Original: The United States  third-largest airline operator, Delta  , will cut 1,000 jobs as a part of reducing service in its hub, Cincinnati .
Revised: The United States third-largest airline operator, Delta Air Lines , will cut 1,000 jobs as a part of reducing service in its hub, Cincinnati .
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Original: The United States  third-largest airline operator, Delta  , will cut 1,000 jobs as a part of reducing service in its hub, Cincinnati .
Revised: The United States third-largest airline operator, Delta , will cut 1,000 jobs due to a planned service reduction at their Cincinnati hub .
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Original:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 planes to an air-cargo company, ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircraft in the fleet.
Revised:  The carrier also announced they will sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 planes to an air-cargo company, ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircraft in the fleet.
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Original:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 planes to an air-cargo company, ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircraft in the fleet.
Revised:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of their Boeing 767-200 planes to an air-cargo company, ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircraft in the fleet.
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Original:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 planes to an air-cargo company, ABX Air Inc., because they are the least fuel-efficient aircraft in the fleet.
Revised:  The carrier also announced it is going to sell 11 of its Boeing 767-200 planes to an air-cargo company, ABX Air Inc., since they are the least fuel-efficient aircraft in the fleet.
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Original:  Cincinnati/Northern Kentucky International Airport lost its 9 destinations, but the carrier said that it would not discomfort the passengers.
Revised:  Cincinnati/Northern Kentucky International Airport lost 9 destinations, but the carrier said that it would not discomfort the passengers.
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Original:  Cincinnati/Northern Kentucky International Airport lost its 9 destinations, but the carrier said that it would not discomfort the passengers.
Revised:  Cincinnati/Northern Kentucky International Airport lost its 9 destinations, but the carrier said there would be no inconvenience to passengers.
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Original:  Delta will fly to 20 new "business destinations" from Atlanta and Salt Lake City  instead.
Revised:  Delta will fly to 20 new "business destinations" from Atlanta and Salt Lake City , instead.
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Original:  Also 41 international connections are to be added or expanded.
Revised:  Also 41 international connections are to be maintained or expanded.
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Original:  The changes took place due to the extremaly difficult financial situation of the company .
Revised:  The changes took place due to the difficult financial situation of the company .
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Original:  It generated $10 billion in losses since 2001  and warned that it could file for bankruptcy if it did not lower its costs
Revised:  It generated $10 billion in losses since 2001 , and warned that it could file for bankruptcy if it did not lower its costs
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Original:  It generated $10 billion in losses since 2001  and warned that it could file for bankruptcy if it did not lower its costs
Revised:  It generated $10 billion in losses since 2001 and warned that they would file for bankruptcy if it did not lower its costs
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Original:  It generated $10 billion in losses since 2001  and warned that it could file for bankruptcy if it did not lower its costs
Revised:  It generated $10 billion in losses since 2001 and warned that it could file for bankruptcy if unsuccessful in lowering costs
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Original:  The United States' third-largest airline operator, Delta Air Lines, will cut 1,000 jobs due to a planned service reduction at their Cincinnati hub .
Revised:  The United States' third-largest airline operator, Delta Air Lines, will cut 1,000 jobs due to a planned service reduction at their .
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Original:  The carrier also announced they will sell 11 of their Boeing 767-200 planes to an air-cargo company, ABX Air Inc., since they are the least fuel-efficient aircraft in the fleet.
Revised:  The carrier also announced they will sell 11 of their planes to an air-cargo company, ABX Air Inc., since they are the least fuel-efficient aircraft in the fleet.
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Original:  Delta will fly to 20 new "business destinations" from Atlanta and Salt Lake City , instead.
Revised:  Delta will fly to 20 new "business destinations" from Atlanta and , instead.
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Original:  The changes took place due to the difficult financial situation of the company, which suffered $10 billion in losses since 2001, and warned that they would file for bankruptcy if unsuccessful in lowering costs
Revised:  The changes took place due to the difficult financial situation of the company, which suffered $10 billion in losses since 2001, and warned that they would file for if unsuccessful in lowering costs
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Original:  However, they may write their answers for the specialized paper in English, French  or any of the other four official languages of the Secretariat, i.e., Arabic, Chinese, Russian  or Spanish.
Revised:  However, they may write their answers for the specialized paper in English, French , or any of the other four official languages of the Secretariat, i.e., Arabic, Chinese, Russian or Spanish.
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Original:  However, they may write their answers for the specialized paper in English, French  or any of the other four official languages of the Secretariat, i.e., Arabic, Chinese, Russian  or Spanish.
Revised:  However, they may write their answers for the specialized paper in English, French or any of the other four official languages of the Secretariat, i.e., Arabic, Chinese, Russian , or Spanish.
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Original:  The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York,  , Andorra La Vella, Athens , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco, Nairobi , Santiago, Vaduz, Valletta, and Vienna .
Revised:  The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York, , , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco, Nairobi , Santiago, Vaduz, Valletta, and Vienna .
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Original:  The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York,  , Andorra La Vella, Athens , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco, Nairobi , Santiago, Vaduz, Valletta, and Vienna .
Revised:  The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York, , Andorra La Vella, Athens , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco, , Santiago, Vaduz, Valletta, and Vienna .
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Original:  The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York,  , Andorra La Vella, Athens , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco, Nairobi , Santiago, Vaduz, Valletta, and Vienna .
Revised:  The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York, , Andorra La Vella, Athens , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco, Nairobi , Santiago, , , and .
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Original:  Andorra, Angola, Antigua and Barbuda, Saudi Arabia, Barbados, Botswana, Brunei Darussalam, Cabo Verde, Comores, Republic of Korea, Gambia, Japan, Greece, Grenada, Guatemala, Equatorial Guinea, Israel, Kiribati, Lao People's Democratic Republic, Liechtenstein, Maldives, Malta, San Marino, Marshall Islands, Mauritius, Mexico, Micronesia, Moldova, Monaco, Norway, Oman, Panama, Portugal, Saint Lucia, Samoa, Salomon Islands, Switzerland, Tajikistan, Tonga, Tuvalu, USA  and Vietnam.
Revised:  Andorra, Angola, Antigua and Barbuda, Saudi Arabia, Barbados, Botswana, Brunei Darussalam, Cabo Verde, Comores, Republic of Korea, Gambia, Japan, Greece, Grenada, Guatemala, Equatorial Guinea, Israel, Kiribati, Lao People's Democratic Republic, Liechtenstein, Maldives, Malta, San Marino, Marshall Islands, Mauritius, Mexico, Micronesia, Moldova, Monaco, Norway, Oman, Panama, Portugal, Saint Lucia, Samoa, Solomon Islands, Switzerland, Tajikistan, Tonga, Tuvalu, USA and Vietnam.
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Original:  Andorra, Angola, Antigua and Barbuda, Saudi Arabia, Barbados, Botswana, Brunei Darussalam, Cabo Verde, Comores, Republic of Korea, Gambia, Japan, Greece, Grenada, Guatemala, Equatorial Guinea, Israel, Kiribati, Lao People's Democratic Republic, Liechtenstein, Maldives, Malta, San Marino, Marshall Islands, Mauritius, Mexico, Micronesia, Moldova, Monaco, Norway, Oman, Panama, Portugal, Saint Lucia, Samoa, Salomon Islands, Switzerland, Tajikistan, Tonga, Tuvalu, USA  and Vietnam.
Revised:  Andorra, Angola, Antigua and Barbuda, Saudi Arabia, Barbados, Botswana, Brunei Darussalam, Cabo Verde, Comores, Republic of Korea, Gambia, Japan, Greece, Grenada, Guatemala, Equatorial Guinea, Israel, Kiribati, Lao People's Democratic Republic, Liechtenstein, Maldives, Malta, San Marino, Marshall Islands, Mauritius, Mexico, Micronesia, Moldova, Monaco, Norway, Oman, Panama, Portugal, Saint Lucia, Samoa, Salomon Islands, Switzerland, Tajikistan, Tonga, Tuvalu, USA , and Vietnam.
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Original: The new model also suggests that our Solar System is in one of the straightest parts of an outer arm of our galaxy .
Revised: The new model also suggests that our Solar System is in one of the straightest parts of an outer arm of our galaxy 
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Original:  ” Related stories UN IIC report faults former "Oil-for-Food" director UN board supported Saddam Hussein's regime, says Iraq's ambassador UN troops accused of rape in Congo;
Revised:  " Related stories UN IIC report faults former "Oil-for-Food" director UN board supported Saddam Hussein's regime, says Iraq's ambassador UN troops accused of rape in Congo;
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Original:  ” Related stories UN IIC report faults former "Oil-for-Food" director UN board supported Saddam Hussein's regime, says Iraq's ambassador UN troops accused of rape in Congo;
Revised:  ” Related news UN IIC report faults former "Oil-for-Food" director UN board supported Saddam Hussein's regime, says Iraq's ambassador UN troops accused of rape in Congo;
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Original: Tropical Storm Paula, which made landfall in western Cuba ,has weakened into a tropical depression near the northern coast of the island nation , the National Hurricane Center says . Paula is the eighteenth tropical cyclone of this year's Atlantic hurricane season.
Revised: Tropical Storm Paula, the eighteenth tropical cyclone of this year's Atlantic hurricane season ,has weakened into a tropical depression near the northern coast of the island nation , the National Hurricane Center says . Paula is the eighteenth tropical cyclone of this year's Atlantic hurricane season.
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Original: Tropical Storm Paula, which made landfall in western Cuba ,has weakened into a tropical depression near the northern coast of the island nation , the National Hurricane Center says . Paula is the eighteenth tropical cyclone of this year's Atlantic hurricane season.
Revised: Tropical Storm Paula, which made landfall in western Cuba ,has weakened into a tropical depression near the northern coast of Cuba , the National Hurricane Center says . Paula is the eighteenth tropical cyclone of this year's Atlantic hurricane season.
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Original: Tropical Storm Paula, which made landfall in western Cuba ,has weakened into a tropical depression near the northern coast of the island nation , the National Hurricane Center says . Paula is the eighteenth tropical cyclone of this year's Atlantic hurricane season.
Revised: Tropical Storm Paula, which made landfall in western Cuba ,has weakened into a tropical depression near the northern coast of the island nation , the National Hurricane Center says . 
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Original:  Another one to two inches of rain are expected to fall today  over central Cuba and the central Bahamas, the NHC added.
Revised:  One to two inches of rain are expected to fall today over central Cuba and the central Bahamas, the NHC added.
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Original:  Another one to two inches of rain are expected to fall today  over central Cuba and the central Bahamas, the NHC added.
Revised:  Another one to two inches of rain is still expected to fall today over central Cuba and the central Bahamas, the NHC added.
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Original:  Paula is the sixteenth named tropical storm of the year.
Revised:  Paula was the sixteenth named tropical storm of the year.
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Original: The GNOME Desktop, which is available in 43 languages, has received some attention over the past few years with large deployments, affecting hundreds of thousands of users, reported in Spain and Brazil and several more on the way in Ireland, the U.K and China.
Revised: The GNOME Desktop, which is available in 43 languages, has received some attention over the past few years with large deployments, affecting hundreds of thousands of users, reported in Spain and Brazil and several more on the way in Ireland, the United Kingdom and China.
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Original:  Version 2.12 of the GNOME Desktop includes several new features among which an updated look and feel, an improved file manager, a new "About Me" panel to keep a user's personal information and Evince, a new PDF and Postscript document viewer .
Revised:  Version 2.12 of the GNOME Desktop has several new features among which an updated look and feel, an improved file manager, a new "About Me" panel to keep a user's personal information and Evince, a new PDF and Postscript document viewer .
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Original:  Version 2.12 of the GNOME Desktop includes several new features among which an updated look and feel, an improved file manager, a new "About Me" panel to keep a user's personal information and Evince, a new PDF and Postscript document viewer .
Revised:  Version 2.12 of the GNOME Desktop includes several new features including an updated look and feel, an improved file manager, a new "About Me" panel to keep a user's personal information and Evince, a new PDF and Postscript document viewer .
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Original:  Angle has faced criticism in the past due to her reported connections to the Scientology organization – a group embroiled in recent controversy over statements from former women members of its elite "Sea Organization" who stated officials pressured them into having abortions if they became pregnant while involved in the Scientology division.
Revised:  Angle has faced criticism in the past due to her reported connections to the Scientology organization . Scientology was recently embroiled in controversy over statements from former women members of its elite "Sea Organization" who stated officials pressured them into having abortions if they became pregnant while involved in the Scientology division.
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Original:  The Washington Post reported that Senator Harry Reid's first negative campaign advertisement about Angle criticized the candidate for, "  supporting a Scientology-backed prisoner rehabilitation program."
Revised:  The Washington Post reported that Senator Harry Reid's first negative campaign advertisement about Angle criticized the candidate for, " ... supporting a Scientology-backed prisoner rehabilitation program."
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Original:  The Scientology organization was recently embroiled in controversy over statements from former women members of its elite "Sea Organization" who stated officials pressured them into having abortions if they became pregnant while involved in the Scientology division.
Revised:  Wikinews previously reported on controversy involving Scientology, over statements from former women members of its elite "Sea Organization" who stated officials pressured them into having abortions if they became pregnant while involved in the Scientology division.
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Original:  Wikinews previously reported on controversy involving Scientology, over statements from former women members of its elite "Sea Organization" who stated officials pressured them into having abortions if they became pregnant while involved in the Scientology division.
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Original: JPG|Sharron Angle in 2010 ]] An influential Nevada politician from the Republican Party has stated she opposes Sharron Angle 's candidacy for United States Senate in that state due to Angle's "extreme" stance against abortion, and will vote against the candidate in the upcoming general election in November.
Revised: JPG|Sharron Angle in 2010 ]] An influential Nevada politician from the Republican Party has stated she opposes 's candidacy for United States Senate in that state due to Angle's "extreme" stance against abortion, and will vote against the candidate in the upcoming general election in November.
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