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Original:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut" , and claimed " t here is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
Revised:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut" , and claimed " t There is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
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Original:  He also claimed the ban on smoking in hospitals was "unjust", because it would restrict those "in need of a comforting cigarette".
Revised:  According to the director, the ban on smoking in hospitals was "unjust", because it would restrict those "in need of a comforting cigarette".
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Original:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut" . Clark also added : "There is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
Revised:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut" , saying : "There is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
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Original:  According to the director , the ban on smoking in hospitals was " unjust", because it would restrict those " in need of a comforting cigarette ".
Revised:  The director further explained, " unjust", because it would restrict those " in need of a comforting cigarette ".
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Original:  According to the director , the ban on smoking in hospitals was " unjust", because it would restrict those " in need of a comforting cigarette ".
Revised:  According to the director , the ban on smoking in hospitals was " Banning smoking on hospital grounds is particularly unjust because it targets smokers who may be stressed and in need of a comforting cigarette ".
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Original:  This is in addition to various  restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces in place since 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children in place since 2015.
Revised:  This is in addition to various existing restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces in place since 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children in place since 2015.
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Original:  This is in addition to various  restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces in place since 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children in place since 2015.
Revised:  This is in addition to various restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces enacted in 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children in place since 2015.
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Original:  This is in addition to various  restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces in place since 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children in place since 2015.
Revised:  This is in addition to various restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces in place since 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children enacted 2015.
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Original:  Two hospitals in the country's south has installed a button-activated speaker system to remind people hospitals are smoke-free.
Revised:  Two hospitals in the country's south have installed a button-activated speaker system to remind people hospitals are smoke-free.
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Original:  In 2016, a similar mechanism was tried at hospitals across Wales, where upon pressing a button an announcement would play recorded by local school children  . Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law ", and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking ".
Revised:  In 2016, a similar mechanism was tried at hospitals across Wales, where an announcement recorded by local school children . Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law ", and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking ".
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Original:  In 2016, a similar mechanism was tried at hospitals across Wales, where upon pressing a button an announcement would play recorded by local school children  . Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law ", and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking ".
Revised:  In 2016, a similar mechanism was tried at hospitals across Wales, where upon pressing a button an announcement would play recorded by local school children would play upon pressing a button . Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law ", and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking ".
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Original:  In 2016, a similar mechanism was tried at hospitals across Wales, where upon pressing a button an announcement would play recorded by local school children  . Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law ", and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking ".
Revised:  In 2016, a similar mechanism was tried at hospitals across Wales, where upon pressing a button an announcement would play recorded by local school children . Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law ," and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking ".
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Original:  In 2016, a similar mechanism was tried at hospitals across Wales, where upon pressing a button an announcement would play recorded by local school children  . Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law ", and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking ".
Revised:  In 2016, a similar mechanism was tried at hospitals across Wales, where upon pressing a button an announcement would play recorded by local school children . Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law ", and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking ."
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Original:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut ", saying: "There is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
Revised:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut ," saying: "There is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
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Original:  Wikinews contacted Eluned Morgan's office to know more about this ban.
Revised:  Wikinews contacted Eluned Morgan's office to learn more about this ban.
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Original:  This is in addition to various existing restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces enacted in 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children enacted 2015.
Revised:  This is in addition to various restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces enacted in 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children enacted 2015.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  This is in addition to various existing restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces enacted in 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children enacted 2015.
Revised:  This is in addition to various existing restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces in place since 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children enacted 2015.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  This is in addition to various existing restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces enacted in 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children enacted 2015.
Revised:  This is in addition to various existing restrictions on the practice, including a ban on smoking in enclosed public spaces enacted in 2007 and a ban on smoking in cars with children in place since 2015.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law , "  and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking . "  She concluded, "[w]e need to do everything we can to combat the harmful effects of smoking."
Revised:  Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law " and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking . " She concluded, "[w]e need to do everything we can to combat the harmful effects of smoking."
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Original:  Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law , "  and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking . "  She concluded, "[w]e need to do everything we can to combat the harmful effects of smoking."
Revised:  Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law , " , and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking . " She concluded, "[w]e need to do everything we can to combat the harmful effects of smoking."
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Original:  Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law , "  and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking . "  She concluded, "[w]e need to do everything we can to combat the harmful effects of smoking."
Revised:  Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law , " and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking " She concluded, "[w]e need to do everything we can to combat the harmful effects of smoking."
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Original:  Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law , "  and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking . "  She concluded, "[w]e need to do everything we can to combat the harmful effects of smoking."
Revised:  Minister for Mental Health, Wellbeing, and the Welsh Language said she was "immensely proud to have brought into force this law , " and "[t]his legislation will benefit the health of future generations in Wales, as fewer children will be exposed to smoking . " . She concluded, "[w]e need to do everything we can to combat the harmful effects of smoking."
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Original:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut , "  saying: "There is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
Revised:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut " saying: "There is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut , "  saying: "There is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
Revised:  Simon Clark, Director of the compared the law to "taking a sledgehammer to crack a nut , " , saying: "There is no evidence that smoking in the open air poses a risk to anyone else's health, including children."
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Original:  Wikinews contacted Eluned Morgan's office to learn more about this ban.
Revised:  Wikinews contacted Eluned Morgan's office to know more about this ban.
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Original: Jürgen Chrobog, former Secratary of State in the German foreign office , was abducted today in eastern Yemen, along with his wife, their three children and three locals.
Revised: Jürgen Chrobog, former Secretary of State in the German foreign office , was abducted today in eastern Yemen, along with his wife, their three children and three locals.
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Original: Jürgen Chrobog, former Secratary of State in the German foreign office , was abducted today in eastern Yemen, along with his wife, their three children and three locals.
Revised: Jürgen Chrobog, former Secratary of State in the German Foreign Office , was abducted today in eastern Yemen, along with his wife, their three children and three locals.
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Original:  Chrobog had been the German ambassador to the United States from 1994 till 2001 when he transfered to the Foreign Office, where he himself negotiated the release German held abroa
Revised:  Chrobog had been the German ambassador to the United States from 1994 till 2001 when he transfered to the Foreign Office, where he himself negotiated the release of Germans held abroad
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Original:  They are reportely demanding that the Yemeni government release member of their tribe from prison.
Revised:  They are reportedly demanding that the Yemeni government release member of their tribe from prison.
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Original:  Chrobog had been the German ambassador to the United States from 1994 till 2001 when he transfered to the Foreign Office, where he himself negotiated the release of Germans held abroad  
Revised:  Chrobog had been the German ambassador to the United States from 1994 till 2001 when he transfered to the Foreign Office, where he himself negotiated the release of Germans held abroad . 
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Original: TV Reports on Indian new schannels suggest a shooting at the Indian Institute of Science, at Bangalore, India.
Revised: TV Reports on Indian news channels suggest a shooting at the Indian Institute of Science, at Bangalore, India.
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Original:  No web news channel has reports yet, but this story is receiving comprehensive coverage on Indian T  
Revised:  No web news channel has reports yet, but this story is receiving comprehensive coverage on Indian TV. 
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Original: TV Reports on Indian news channels suggest a shooting at the Indian Institute of Science, at Bangalore, India .
Revised: A shooting at the Indian Institute of Science, at Bangalore, India .
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Original:  Update The shooting occurred during a dinner being hosted in honour of a conference which was attended by academicians across the country.
Revised:  The shooting occurred during a dinner being hosted in honour of a conference which was attended by academicians across the country.
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Original:  The assailant has not yet been apprehended, and Bangalore is currently under the throes of a lockdown, with a red alert being declared by the government .
Revised:  The assailant has not yet been apprehended, and Bangalore is currently in a state of lockdown, with a red alert being declared by the government .
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Original:  The assailant has not yet been apprehended, and Bangalore is currently under the throes of a lockdown, with a red alert being declared by the government .
Revised:  The assailant has not yet been apprehended, and Bangalore is currently under the throes of a lockdown, with a red alert being declared by the government 
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Original:  Indiscriminate firing by an unidentified gunman led to a number of scientists and technicians getting injured, including a professor from the Indian Institute of Technology at New Delhi, who later died of his injuries.
Revised:  Indiscriminate firing by unidentified assailants led to a number of scientists and technicians getting injured, including a professor from the Indian Institute of Technology at New Delhi, who later died of his injuries.
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Original:  No terrorist outfits have claimed responsibility yet  
Revised:  No terrorist outfits have claimed responsibility yet . 
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Original:  Israeli ambassador to the U.S. promised to "continue working together"  .
Revised:  Israeli ambassador to the U.S. promised to "continue working together" with the US .
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Original: The United States, also a non-member of the organisation, has targeted sanctions against the prosecutor's office under former  President Donald Trump ;
Revised: The United States, also a non-member of the organisation, has targeted sanctions against the prosecutor's office under former US President Donald Trump ;
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Original:  current President Joe Biden has been urged by the to defy "illegitimate, politically motivated investigations " and maintain them .
Revised:  current President Joe Biden has been urged by the to defy "illegitimate, politically motivated investigation " and maintain them .
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Original:  current President Joe Biden has been urged by the to defy "illegitimate, politically motivated investigations " and maintain them .
Revised:  current President Joe Biden has been urged by the to defy "illegitimate, politically motivated investigations " .
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Original:  The Foreign Ministry of the Palestinian Authority , which exercises authority in the West Bank, called the decision "a long-awaited step that serves Palestine ’ s tireless pursuit of justice and accountability", while also asking nations not to politicise "these independent proceedings".
Revised:  The of the , which exercises authority in the West Bank, called the decision "a long-awaited step that serves Palestine ’ s tireless pursuit of justice and accountability", while also asking nations not to politicise "these independent proceedings".
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Original:  The Foreign Ministry of the Palestinian Authority , which exercises authority in the West Bank, called the decision "a long-awaited step that serves Palestine ’ s tireless pursuit of justice and accountability", while also asking nations not to politicise "these independent proceedings".
Revised:  The Foreign Ministry of the Palestinian Authority , which exercises authority in the West Bank, called the decision "a long-awaited step that serves Palestine ' s tireless pursuit of justice and accountability", while also asking nations not to politicise "these independent proceedings".
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Original:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who was confident the rocket attacks fired into Israel in 2014 were legal under international law,  " welcome d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a "  step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
Revised:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who had asserted rocket attacks fired into Israel in 2014 were legal under international law, " welcome d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a " step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
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Original:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who was confident the rocket attacks fired into Israel in 2014 were legal under international law,  " welcome d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a "  step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
Revised:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who was confident the rocket attacks fired on Israel were legal under international law, " welcome d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a " step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
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Original:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who was confident the rocket attacks fired into Israel in 2014 were legal under international law,  " welcome d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a "  step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
Revised:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who was confident the rocket attacks fired into Israel in 2014 were legal under international law, said: " welcome d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a " step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
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Original:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who was confident the rocket attacks fired into Israel in 2014 were legal under international law,  " welcome d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a "  step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
Revised:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who was confident the rocket attacks fired into Israel in 2014 were legal under international law, " d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a " step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
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Original:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who was confident the rocket attacks fired into Israel in 2014 were legal under international law,  " welcome d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a "  step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
Revised:  Spokesperson for Hamas Hazem Qassem, who was confident the rocket attacks fired into Israel in 2014 were legal under international law, " welcome d the ICC decision to investigate Israeli occupation war crimes against our people" , and that it was a " is a step forward to implement justice, punish the occupation, and do justice to the Palestinian people".
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Original:  73 Israelis ( including six civilians ) were killed according to Israeli estimates.
Revised:  73 Israelis including six civilians ) were killed according to Israeli estimates.
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Original:  73 Israelis ( including six civilians ) were killed according to Israeli estimates.
Revised:  73 Israelis ( including six civilians were killed according to Israeli estimates.
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