wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  British Occupation of Corinto When Nicaragua refused to pay Britain an indemnity for the annexation of the Mosquito Reserve, the British responded by occupying the Nicaraguan Pacific port of Corinto on 27 April 1895.
Revised:  British occupation of Corinto When Nicaragua refused to pay Britain an indemnity for the annexation of the Mosquito Reserve, the British responded by occupying the Nicaraguan Pacific port of Corinto on 27 April 1895.
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Original:  Eventually the British left after being paid indemnities by the Nicaraguan URL
Revised:  Eventually the British left after being paid indemnities by the Nicaraguan government.
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Original:  Thoreau , Henry David (1849).
Revised:  He dedThoreau , Henry David (1849).
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Original:   Thoreau, Henry David (1849).
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Original:  Of his appearance and disposition, Ellery Channing wrote: <blockquote> His face, once seen, could not be forgotten.
Revised:  Of his appearance and disposition, Ellery Channing wrote: His face, once seen, could not be forgotten.
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Original: Sexuality Thoreau never married and was childless.
Revised: Sexuality Stop lying about a man who is not here to defend himself.Portraying Thoreau as a homosexual to make yourself feel better is a crime. Get a life. never married and was childless.
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Original: Kipng'eno Arap Ng'eny (c. 1948 – July 1, 2014) was a Kenyan politician and telecommunications executive.
Revised: Kipng'eno Arap Ng'eny URL – July 1, 2014) was a Kenyan politician and telecommunications executive.
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Original:  He served as the Managing Director of the now defunct Kenya Posts and Telecommunications Corporation from 1979 until 1993.
Revised:  He served as the Managing Director of the now-defunct Kenya Posts and Telecommunications Corporation from 1979 until 1993.
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Original:  He chose cremation, rather than burial at his ancestral home, which is the norm for Kalenjin funeral rites.
Revised:  He chose cremation, rather than burial at his ancestral home, which is not a popular norm for Kalenjin funeral rites.
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Original:  He chose cremation, rather than burial at his ancestral home, which is not a popular norm for Kalenjin funeral rites.
Revised:  He chose cremation, rather than burial at his ancestral home, which is the norm for Kalenjin funeral rites.
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Original: quotebox|align = width=12em|<center> Thayambaka or tayambaka is a type of solo chenda performance that developed in the south Indian state of Kerala, in which the main player at the centre improvises rhythmically on the beats of half-a-dozen or a few more chenda and ilathalam players around.
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Original:  External links Appu Marar performing Thripuda  Tribute on Blog Reference on Thrissur Pooram Festival site Reference on Maddys Reference on Blog Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 1 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 2 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 3 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 4 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 5 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 6 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 7
Revised:  External links Appu Marar performing Thripuda '' Tribute on Blog Reference on Thrissur Pooram Festival site Reference on Maddys Reference on Blog Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 1 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 2 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 3 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 4 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 5 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 6 Pallavur Appu Marar on YouTube 7
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Original:  Ammini was forced to remarry Subramaniam Iyer, and had two more sons, Manian and Kunhikuttan, who, years later, completed the Pallavur trio.
Revised:  Ammini was forced to remarry Subramania Iyer, and had two more sons, Manian and Kunhikuttan, who, years later, completed the Pallavur trio.
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Original:  His son, Kunissery Chandran, is also a known Madalam exponent.
Revised:  His son, Kunissery Chandran, is also a known Maddalam exponent.
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Original: Personal life Her husband Prajin is also an actor of South Indian films  .
Revised: Personal life She got married to Prajin in 2008 who is an actor in South Indian films .
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Original:  The couple were blessed with twin baby girls on 23 March 2019 named Rudhrabaala and Mithrabala .
Revised:  The couple were blessed with twin baby girls on 23 March 2019 named Rudhra and Mithra .
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Original: Sandra Amy is (5 June 1984 – 21 July 2021) an Indian film and television actress as well as a video jockey.
Revised: Sandra Amy is an Indian film and television actress as well as a video jockey.
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Original:  She was born in Idukki who was a child artist in Malayalam films After appearing in supporting role in the Malayalam films Kasthooriman, Sandra Amy, Tamil film actress dies in Chennai hospital , Times of India, 21 July 2021.
Revised:  She was born in Idukki who was a child artist in Malayalam films After appearing in supporting role in the Malayalam films Kasthooriman, , Times of India, 21 July 2021.
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Original:  She was born in Idukki who was a child artist in Malayalam films After appearing in supporting role in the Malayalam films Kasthooriman, Sandra Amy, Tamil film actress dies in Chennai hospital , Times of India, 21 July 2021.
Revised:  She was born in Idukki who was a child artist in Malayalam films After appearing in supporting role in the Malayalam films Kasthooriman, Sandra Amy, Tamil film actress dies in Chennai hospital 
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Original: Actresses in Tamil television Category:Actresses from Thiruvananthapuram Category:Actresses in Tamil cinema Category:Actresses in Malayalam cinema Category:Living people Category:Indian film actresses Category:21st-century Indian actresses Category:2021 deaths Category:Malayali people Category:People from Idukki district Category:Indian television actresses Category:Actresses in Malayalam television Category:Female models from Thiruvananthapuram Category:1984 birt
Revised: Actresses in Tamil television Category:Actresses from Thiruvananthapuram Category:Actresses in Tamil cinema Category:Actresses in Malayalam cinema Category:Living people Category:Indian film actresses Category:21st-century Indian actresses Category:Malayali people Category:People from Idukki district Category:Indian television actresses Category:Actresses in Malayalam television Category:Female models from Thiruvananthapuram Category:1984 birt
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Original: Comanagement, also called community-based management, community-based resource management, cooperative management, joint management, and collaborative management, in the broadest terms refers to the administration of a particular place  being shared between two entities.
Revised: Comanagement, also known as community-based management, community-based resource management, cooperative management, joint management, and collaborative management, in the broadest terms refers to the administration of a particular place being shared between two entities.
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Original: Comanagement, also called community-based management, community-based resource management, cooperative management, joint management, and collaborative management, in the broadest terms refers to the administration of a particular place  being shared between two entities.
Revised: Comanagement, also called community-based management, community-based resource management, cooperative management, joint management, and collaborative management, in the broadest terms refers to the administration of a particular place or resource being shared between two entities.
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Original: Comanagement and Indigenous Peoples Co-management arrangements in Canada between Crown governments and Aboriginal groups have typically arisen out of comprehensive land claims settlements (modern treaties), crisis resolution processes (ie. over resource disputes), and more recently out of growing legal recognition of Indigenous right through supreme court jurisprudence, such as the 1999 Sparrow ruling.
Revised: Comanagement and Indigenous Peoples Co-management arrangements in Canada between Crown governments and Aboriginal groups have historically arisen out of comprehensive land claims settlements (modern treaties), crisis resolution processes (ie. over resource disputes), and more recently out of growing legal recognition of Indigenous right through supreme court jurisprudence, such as the 1999 Sparrow ruling.
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Original:   Ivvavik National Park  in the Yukon was created in 1984 and is part of the Inuvialuit Final Agreement.
Revised:  Ivvavik National Park , in the Yukon was created in 1984 and is part of the Inuvialuit Final Agreement.
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Original:  &  Likewise, the Labrador Inuit Land Claims Agreement dictates co-management of Torngat Mountains National Park in Labrador, created in 2005.
Revised:  & Likewise, the Labrador Inuit Land Claims Agreement established a cooperative management board that would administer the Torngat Mountains National Park in Labrador, created in 2005.
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Original:  Proposals for new parks , such as Thaydene Nene National Park (proposed) in the Northwest Territories  typically involve some kind of negotiations over co-management.
Revised:  In certain cases , such as Thaydene Nene National Park (proposed) in the Northwest Territories typically involve some kind of negotiations over co-management.
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Original:  For example thefederal government and a province can jointly manage a park such as the Saguenay–St.
Revised:  For example , the federal government and a province can jointly manage a park such as the Saguenay–St.
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Original:  However, many of these Southern Parks are witnessing changes in the way the state engages with its Indigenous partners which have been effective to varying degrees Murray, G., & King, L. (2012).
Revised:  Many of these Southern Parks are witnessing changes in the way the state engages with its Indigenous partners which have been effective to varying degrees Murray, G., & King, L. (2012).
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Original:  However, many of these Southern Parks are witnessing changes in the way the state engages with its Indigenous partners which have been effective to varying degrees Murray, G., & King, L. (2012).
Revised:  However, many of these Southern Parks are witnessing changes in the way the state engages with its Indigenous partners Murray, G., & King, L. (2012).
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Original:  It consists of two members appointed by each of the Government of Canada, Province of British Columbia, the Nuu-chah-nulth Tribal Council, the regional districts, as well as eight non-government members jointly appointed by the levels of government from the wider community    .
Revised:  It consists of two members appointed by each of the Government of Canada, Province of British Columbia, the Nuu-chah-nulth Tribal Council, the regional districts, as well as eight non-government members jointly appointed by the levels of government from the wider community . .
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Original:  The committee was comprised of representative from local Indigenous communities, territorial and federal governments, local outfitters, and environmental organizations and was responsible for advising the Yukon Fish and Wildlife Management Board on decisions relating to the sheep herd.
Revised:  The committee was composed of representative from local Indigenous communities, territorial and federal governments, local outfitters, and environmental organizations and was responsible for advising the Yukon Fish and Wildlife Management Board on decisions relating to the sheep herd.
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Original:  McMaster University., in the Canadian context it typically refers to agreements between government agencies and representatives of Aboriginal peoples in Canada to jointly make land use and resource management decisions about a tract of government-controlled land (e.g. protected areas) or resource (e.g.fishery.).
Revised:  McMaster University., in the Canadian context it typically refers to agreements between government agencies and representatives of Indigenous peoples in Canada to jointly make land use and resource management decisions about a tract of government-controlled land (e.g. protected areas) or resource (e.g.fishery.).
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Original:  Comanagement and Indigenous Peoples Co-management arrangements in Canada between Crown governments and Aboriginal groups have historically arisen out of comprehensive land claims settlements (modern treaties), crisis resolution processes (ie. over resource disputes), and more recently out of growing legal recognition of Indigenous right through supreme court jurisprudence, such as the 1999 Sparrow ruling.
Revised:  Comanagement and Indigenous Peoples Co-management arrangements in Canada between Crown governments and Indigenous groups have historically arisen out of comprehensive land claims settlements (modern treaties), crisis resolution processes (ie. over resource disputes), and more recently out of growing legal recognition of Indigenous right through supreme court jurisprudence, such as the 1999 Sparrow ruling.
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Original:  Justice Berger's 1977 Mackenzie Valley pipeline inquiry led Parks Canada in 1979 to recognize "the potential for joint management of parks%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% with Aboriginal peoples"Thomlinson, E., Crouch, G. (2012).
Revised:  of parks%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% with Aboriginal peoples"Thomlinson, E., Crouch, G. (2012).
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Original:  Justice Berger's 1977 Mackenzie Valley pipeline inquiry led Parks Canada in 1979 to recognize "the potential for joint management of parks%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% with Aboriginal peoples"Thomlinson, E., Crouch, G. (2012).
Revised:  Justice Berger's 1977 Mackenzie Valley pipeline inquiry led Parks Canada in 1979 to recognize "the potential for joint management %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% with Aboriginal peoples"Thomlinson, E., Crouch, G. (2012).
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Original:  Justice Berger's 1977 Mackenzie Valley pipeline inquiry led Parks Canada in 1979 to recognize "the potential for joint management of parks%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% with Aboriginal peoples"Thomlinson, E., Crouch, G. (2012).
Revised:  Justice Berger's 1977 Mackenzie Valley pipeline inquiry led Parks Canada in 1979 to recognize "the potential for joint management of parks%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Crouch, G. (2012).
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Original:  In certain cases, such as the newer Thaidene Nëné National Park Reserve in the Northwest Territories and Łutsël K’é Dene territory, alternative protected areas (e.g. Territorial Protected Areas) have been established in conjunction with national projects, which are often initiated by Indigenous partners. typically involve some kind of negotiations over co-management.
Revised:  In certain cases, such as the newer Thaidene Nëné National Park Reserve in the Northwest Territories and Łutsël K’é Dene territory, other types of protected areas (e.g. Territorial Protected Areas) have been established in conjunction with national projects, which are often initiated by Indigenous partners. typically involve some kind of negotiations over co-management.
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Original:  In certain cases, such as the newer Thaidene Nëné National Park Reserve in the Northwest Territories and Łutsël K’é Dene territory, alternative protected areas (e.g. Territorial Protected Areas) have been established in conjunction with national projects, which are often initiated by Indigenous partners. typically involve some kind of negotiations over co-management.
Revised:  In certain cases, such as the newer Thaidene Nëné National Park Reserve in the Northwest Territories and Łutsël K’é Dene territory, alternative protected areas (e.g. Territorial Protected Areas) have been established in conjunction with national projects, which are often initiated by Indigenous partners. 
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Original:  In contrast to the Northern context, Southern Canada, where socio-political complexities relating to treaty context and jurisdictional overlap persist, agreement-making between Aboriginal groups and Parks Canada Agency and Indigenous engagement in general, is less consistent.
Revised:  In contrast to the Northern context, Southern Canada, where socio-political complexities relating to treaty context and jurisdictional overlap persist, agreement-making between Indigenous groups and Parks Canada Agency and Indigenous engagement in general, is less consistent.
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Original:  A separate but related phenomenon is the joint management of parks by two governments without an Aboriginal partner.
Revised:  A separate but related phenomenon is the joint management of parks by two governments without an Indigenous partner.
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Original: co-management and Indigenous Peoples Co-management arrangements in Canada between Crown governments and Indigenous groups have historically arisen out of comprehensive land claims settlements (modern treaties), crisis resolution processes (ie. over resource disputes), and more recently out of growing legal recognition of Indigenous right through supreme court jurisprudence, such as the 1999 Sparrow ruling.
Revised: Co-managementnagement and Indigenous Peoples Co-management arrangements in Canada between Crown governments and Indigenous groups have historically arisen out of comprehensive land claims settlements (modern treaties), crisis resolution processes (ie. over resource disputes), and more recently out of growing legal recognition of Indigenous right through supreme court jurisprudence, such as the 1999 Sparrow ruling.
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Original:  Subsequently  passing Boot Camp challenges, she appears as a 'Top 16'.
Revised:  Subsequently , passing Boot Camp challenges, she appears as a 'Top 16'.
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Original:   Sierra Nevada Wildflowers, Karen Wiese, 2nd ed , 2013, p 13–14 It is generally located in mountains, below the upper montane vegetation type.
Revised:  Sierra Nevada Wildflowers, Karen Wiese, 2nd ed 
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Original:  Middle, Chronic / Latent Stage: The middle stage of an HIV infection can last for 7–10 years in a patient who is not being treated with ART therapy.
Revised:  Middle, chronic / Latent Stage: The middle stage of an HIV infection can last for 7–10 years in a patient who is not being treated with ART therapy.
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Original:  Middle, Chronic / Latent Stage: The middle stage of an HIV infection can last for 7–10 years in a patient who is not being treated with ART therapy.
Revised:  Middle, Chronic / latent stage The middle stage of an HIV infection can last for 7–10 years in a patient who is not being treated with ART therapy.
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Original: Late, Advanced / Immunodeficient Stage or AIDS: AIDS is caused by the progressive destruction of CD4 T-helper cells of the immune system by the HIV virus.
Revised: Late, Advanced / immunodeficient stage AIDS is caused by the progressive destruction of CD4 T-helper cells of the immune system by the HIV virus.
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Original: HIV in pregnancy is the presence of an HIV/AIDS infection in an individual with uterus while she is pregnant.
Revised: HIV in pregnancy is the presence of an HIV/AIDS infection in a woman while she is pregnant.
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Original:  There is a risk of HIV transmission from gestational parent to child in three primary situations: pregnancy, childbirth, and while breastfeeding.
Revised:  There is a risk of HIV transmission from mother to child in three primary situations: pregnancy, childbirth, and while breastfeeding.
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Original:  This topic is important because the risk of viral transmission can be significantly reduced with appropriate medical intervention, and without treatment HIV/AIDS can cause significant illness and death in both the gestational parent and child.
Revised:  This topic is important because the risk of viral transmission can be significantly reduced with appropriate medical intervention, and without treatment HIV/AIDS can cause significant illness and death in both the mother and child.
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Original:  Notably, 20-34\% of individuals with uterus in the United States are unaware that they have HIV until they become pregnant and undergo prenatal screening.
Revised:  Notably, 20-34\% of women in the United States are unaware that they have HIV until they become pregnant and undergo prenatal screening.
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Original:  Early identification of maternal HIV infection and initiation of ART in pregnancy is vital in preventing viral transmission to the fetus and protecting maternal health, as HIV-infected individuals with uterus who do not receive testing are more likely to transmit the infection to their children.
Revised:  Early identification of maternal HIV infection and initiation of ART in pregnancy is vital in preventing viral transmission to the fetus and protecting maternal health, as HIV-infected women who do not receive testing are more likely to transmit the infection to their children.
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Original:  For individuals with uterus who have not received prenatal care or who have not been previously tested for HIV infection during pregnancy, ACOG and the NIH suggest performing rapid HIV screening in the labor and delivery unit prior to delivery or immediately postpartum.
Revised:  For women who have not received prenatal care or who have not been previously tested for HIV infection during pregnancy, ACOG and the NIH suggest performing rapid HIV screening in the labor and delivery unit prior to delivery or immediately postpartum.
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Original:  Opt-out testing involves educating the patient on the impact of an HIV infection on pregnancy, notifying the patient that HIV screening is recommended for all pregnant individuals with uterus , and informing her that she will automatically receive the test with her other routine lab work unless she explicitly declines the test and signs a consent form to have it removed from her lab panel.
Revised:  Opt-out testing involves educating the patient on the impact of an HIV infection on pregnancy, notifying the patient that HIV screening is recommended for all pregnant women , and informing her that she will automatically receive the test with her other routine lab work unless she explicitly declines the test and signs a consent form to have it removed from her lab panel.
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Original:  For individuals with uterus with a lower viral load (HIV RNA less than 1000 copies/mL), the risk of transmission is less than 1\%.
Revised:  For women with a lower viral load (HIV RNA less than 1000 copies/mL), the risk of transmission is less than 1\%.
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Original:  Some individuals with uterus are concerned about using ART early in the pregnancy, as babies are most susceptible to drug toxicities during the first trimester.
Revised:  Some women are concerned about using ART early in the pregnancy, as babies are most susceptible to drug toxicities during the first trimester.
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Original:  Antiretroviral therapy is most importantly used at the following times in pregnancy to reduce the risk of gestational parent-to-child transmission of HIV: During pregnancy: pregnant individuals with uterus infected with HIV receive an oral regimen of at least three different anti-HIV medications.
Revised:  Antiretroviral therapy is most importantly used at the following times in pregnancy to reduce the risk of gestational parent-to-child transmission of HIV: During pregnancy: pregnant women infected with HIV receive an oral regimen of at least three different anti-HIV medications.
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Original:  During labor and delivery: pregnant individuals with uterus infected with HIV who are already on triple ART should continue with their oral regimen.
Revised:  During labor and delivery: pregnant women infected with HIV who are already on triple ART should continue with their oral regimen.
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