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Original:  In 2007 a grenade was thrown at the building while then Russian President Vladimir Putin was visitin 
Revised:  In 2007 a grenade was thrown at the building while then Russian President Vladimir Putin was visiting. 
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Original:  In June Russia shut off Belarus's gas supply over un-paid bill
Revised:  In June Russia shut off Belarus's gas supply over un-paid bills
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Original:  The Russian foriegn office released a statment on the event saying " We view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations."
Revised:  The Russian foriegn office released a statement on the event saying " We view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations."
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Original:  The Russian foriegn office released a statment on the event saying " We view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations."
Revised:  The Russian foriegn office released a statment on the event stating that " We view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations."
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Original:  The Russian foriegn office released a statment on the event saying " We view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations."
Revised:  The Russian foriegn office released a statment on the event saying " we view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations."
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Original:  In 2007  a grenade was thrown at the building while then Russian President Vladimir Putin was visiting.
Revised:  In 2007 , a grenade was thrown at the building while then Russian President Vladimir Putin was visiting.
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Original:  In June Russia shut off Belarus's gas supply over un-paid bills
Revised:  In June Russia shut off Belarus's gas supply over unpaid bills
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Original: The Russian Embassy in Minsk The Russian embassy in , Belarus has been attacked by . Unknown assailants threw two of the explosives into the embassy premises.
Revised: The Russian embassy in Minsk , Belarus has been attacked by . Unknown assailants threw two of the explosives into the embassy premises.
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Original:  The Managing Director of Australian Reef Pilots, Craig Southerwood confirmed that one of the dead was a 61 year old marine pilot working for the agenc
Revised:  The Managing Director of Australian Reef Pilots, Craig Southerwood confirmed that one of the dead was a 61 year old marine pilot working for the agency
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Original: Three Australian citizens and a New Zealander have died when a chartered light aircraft in which they were travelling crashed on Misima Island off the coast of Papua New Guinea.
Revised: Three Australian citizens and a New Zealander died when a chartered light aircraft in which they were travelling crashed on Misima Island off the coast of Papua New Guinea.
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Original:  The plane, a Cessna Citation with 5 people on board, is said by locals to have overshot the runway in poor weather, before crashing into trees and bursting into flames.
Revised:  The plane, a Cessna Citation with five people on board, is said by locals to have overshot the runway in poor weather, before crashing into trees and bursting into flames.
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Original:  The Managing Director of Australian Reef Pilots, Craig Southerwood confirmed that one of the dead was a 61 year old marine pilot working for the agency
Revised:  The Managing Director of Australian Reef Pilots, Craig Southerwood confirmed that one of the dead was a 61-year old marine pilot working for the agency
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Original: Three Australian citizens and a New Zealander died when a chartered light aircraft in which they were travelling crashed on Misima Island off the coast of Papua New Guinea.
Revised: Three Australian citizens and a New Zealander died when the chartered light aircraft in which they were travelling crashed on Misima Island off the coast of Papua New Guinea.
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Original: Recent talks have also been met with an announcement that an agreement between the two countries regarding missile tests would be signed in October.
Revised: Recent talks have also been met with the announcement that an agreement between the two countries regarding missile tests would be signed in October.
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Original:  Discussion on other items on the New York agenda occured today and will continue tomorrow in a second day of talks.
Revised:  Discussion on other items on the New York agenda occurred today and will continue tomorrow in a second day of talks.
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Original:  His death was announced by the Estonian Defence Minist 
Revised:  His death was announced by the w:Estonian Defence Ministry. 
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Original:  Fellow soliders tried to administer first aid and Sikka was transported by helicopter to Camp Bastio  
Revised:  Fellow soliders tried to administer first aid and Sikka was transported by helicopter to Camp Bastion. 
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Original: Estonian forces have been in Afghanistan since 2001 An Estonian solider has been killed in southern Afghanistan.
Revised: Estonian forces have been in Afghanistan since 2001 An Estonian soldier has been killed in southern Afghanistan.
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Original:  His death was announced by the w: Estonian Defence Ministry.
Revised:  His death was announced by the Estonian Defence Ministry.
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Original:  Fellow soliders tried to administer first aid and Sikka was transported by helicopter to Camp Bastion.
Revised:  Fellow soldiers tried to administer first aid and Sikka was transported by helicopter to Camp Bastion.
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Original:  A joint statment from Prime Minister Andrus Ansip, Minister of Defense Jaak Aaviksoo and Foreign Minister Urmas Paetissued  "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
Revised:  A joint statement from Prime Minister Andrus Ansip, Minister of Defense Jaak Aaviksoo and Foreign Minister Urmas Paetissued "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
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Original:  A joint statment from Prime Minister Andrus Ansip, Minister of Defense Jaak Aaviksoo and Foreign Minister Urmas Paetissued  "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
Revised:  A joint statment from Prime Minister Andrus Ansip, Minister of Defense Jaak Aaviksoo and Foreign Minister Urmas Paetissued praised his "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
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Original:  With Sikka's death, the death-toll of Estonian soliders in Afghanistan has risen to eight
Revised:  With Sikka's death, the death-toll of Estonian soldiers in Afghanistan has risen to eight
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Original: Image:West African cholera mural.jpg| 340px|Mural in West Africa depicting the effects of colera.
Revised:  340px|Mural in West Africa depicting the effects of colera.
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Original: Image:West African cholera mural.jpg| 340px|Mural in West Africa depicting the effects of colera.
Revised: Image:West African cholera mural.jpg| 340px|Mural in West Africa depicting the effects of cholera.
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Original:   Conservative newspapers including the The Washington Times and The Daily Telegraph harshly critisized the ban, labelling it a result of "bureaucratic irritation" , "socialist", a "war on Edison's greatest invention" , and implying insanity.
Revised:  Conservative newspapers including the The Washington Times harshly critisized the ban, labelling it a result of "bureaucratic irritation" , "socialist", a "war on Edison's greatest invention" , and implying insanity.
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Original:   Conservative newspapers including the The Washington Times and The Daily Telegraph harshly critisized the ban, labelling it a result of "bureaucratic irritation" , "socialist", a "war on Edison's greatest invention" , and implying insanity.
Revised:  Conservative newspapers including the The Washington Times and The Daily Telegraph harshly critisized the ban, labelling it a result of "bureaucratic irritation" and a "war on Edison's greatest invention" , and implying insanity.
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Original:   Conservative newspapers including the The Washington Times and The Daily Telegraph harshly critisized the ban, labelling it a result of "bureaucratic irritation" , "socialist", a "war on Edison's greatest invention" , and implying insanity.
Revised:  Conservative newspapers including the The Washington Times and The Daily Telegraph harshly critisized the ban, labelling it a result of "bureaucratic irritation" , "socialist", a "war on Edison's greatest invention" 
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Original:  Criticism of such bans includes panic buying prior to phase-out, environmental impacts of the mercury which is contained in small amounts in all fluorescent lamps, and increased costs . Brazil and Venezuela started to phase out incandescent light bulbs in 2005, Switzerland in 2009, while Argentina, Russia and Canada are planning it for 2012.
Revised:  . General criticism of such bans includes panic buying prior to phase-out, environmental impacts of the mercury which is contained in small amounts in all fluorescent lamps, and increased costs . Brazil and Venezuela started to phase out incandescent light bulbs in 2005, Switzerland in 2009, while Argentina, Russia and Canada are planning it for 2012.
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Original:  Criticism of such bans includes panic buying prior to phase-out, environmental impacts of the mercury which is contained in small amounts in all fluorescent lamps, and increased costs . Brazil and Venezuela started to phase out incandescent light bulbs in 2005, Switzerland in 2009, while Argentina, Russia and Canada are planning it for 2012.
Revised:  Criticism of such bans includes panic buying prior to phase-out, environmental impacts of the mercury which is contained in small amounts in all fluorescent lamps, and increased upfront costs for the consumer . Brazil and Venezuela started to phase out incandescent light bulbs in 2005, Switzerland in 2009, while Argentina, Russia and Canada are planning it for 2012.
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Original:  Criticism of such bans includes panic buying prior to phase-out, environmental impacts of the mercury which is contained in small amounts in all fluorescent lamps, and increased costs . Brazil and Venezuela started to phase out incandescent light bulbs in 2005, Switzerland in 2009, while Argentina, Russia and Canada are planning it for 2012.
Revised:  Criticism of such bans includes panic buying prior to phase-out, environmental impacts of the mercury which is contained in small amounts in all fluorescent lamps, and increased costs . Brazil and Venezuela started to phase out incandescent light bulbs in 2005, Switzerland in 2009, while Russia and Canada are planning it for 2012.
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Original:  The United States is scheduled to begin a phaseout similar to the European one in 2012.
Revised:  The United States is scheduled to begin a phaseout similar to the European one from 2012.
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Original:  In its August 31 editorial , the conservative The Washington Times harshly criticized the ban, labeling it a result of "bureaucratic irritation" and a "war on Edison's greatest invention".
Revised:  In its August 31 editorial , the conservative The Washington Times harshly criticized the ban, labelling it a result of "bureaucratic irritation" and a "war on Edison's greatest invention".
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Original: From 2012  energy saving lamps will replace all incandescent lamps in the EU Starting today, it is illegal to manufacture or import 75W incandescent light bulbs in the European Union.
Revised: Starting from 2012 energy saving lamps will replace all incandescent lamps in the EU Starting today, it is illegal to manufacture or import 75W incandescent light bulbs in the European Union.
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Original: From 2012  energy saving lamps will replace all incandescent lamps in the EU Starting today, it is illegal to manufacture or import 75W incandescent light bulbs in the European Union.
Revised: From 2012 , energy saving lamps will replace all incandescent lamps in the EU Starting today, it is illegal to manufacture or import 75W incandescent light bulbs in the European Union.
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Original:  The new speed is twice faster .
Revised:  The new speed is twice as fast .
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Original:  Telstra switched to them in February, thus making  switch to HSPA possible now.
Revised:  Telstra switched to them in February, thus making the switch to HSPA possible now.
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Original:  Labor party aims to spend USD 43 billion to bring 1 Gbps wired Internet nationwide, and Coalition party plans to spend USD 6 billion to introduce a variety of improvements including upgrade of existing copper Internet as well as expansion of wireless Internet to support 12Mbps.
Revised:  Labor party aims to spend AUD 43 billion to bring 1 Gbps wired Internet nationwide, and Coalition party plans to spend USD 6 billion to introduce a variety of improvements including upgrade of existing copper Internet as well as expansion of wireless Internet to support 12Mbps.
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Original:  Labor party aims to spend USD 43 billion to bring 1 Gbps wired Internet nationwide, and Coalition party plans to spend USD 6 billion to introduce a variety of improvements including upgrade of existing copper Internet as well as expansion of wireless Internet to support 12Mbps.
Revised:  Labor party aims to spend USD 43 billion to bring 1 Gbps wired Internet nationwide, and Coalition party plans to spend AUD 6 billion to introduce a variety of improvements including upgrade of existing copper Internet as well as expansion of wireless Internet to support 12Mbps.
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Original:  This is happening at the same time as one of Telstra's competitors Vodaphone is doubling data download quotas on mobile cap plans.
Revised:  This is happening at the same time as one of Telstra's competitors Vodafone is doubling data download quotas on mobile cap plans.
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Original:  The tournament will decide what four teams will qualify for the 2011 FIFA Under-17 World Cu 
Revised:  The tournament will decide what four teams will qualify for the 2011 FIFA Under-17 World Cup. 
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Original:  I am extremely pleased with this decision as it will certainly help to give a fillip to western football development which, in recent times, has been facing numerous challenges  
Revised:  I am extremely pleased with this decision as it will certainly help to give a fillip to western football development which, in recent times, has been facing numerous challenges ." 
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Original:  Burrell said that he will announce the two locations used for the tournament shortl
Revised:  Burrell said that he will announce the two locations used for the tournament shortly
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Original:  Martin, who played a few songs on the piano, including the hit song "Yellow," jokingly called his performance "the toughest closing gig I've ever had.  
Revised:  Martin, who played a few songs on the piano, including the hit song "Yellow," jokingly called his performance "the toughest closing gig I've ever had. " 
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Original: The annual event started at 10 a.m. PDT | (1700 UTC) in the Yerba Buena Center for the Arts in San Francisco, Califonia.
Revised: The annual event started at 10 a.m. PDT (1700 UTC) in the Yerba Buena Center for the Arts in San Francisco, Califonia.
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Original: The annual event started at 10 a.m. PDT (1700 UTC) in the Yerba Buena Center for the Arts in San Francisco, Califonia .
Revised: The annual event started at 10 a.m. PDT (1700 UTC) in the Yerba Buena Center for the Arts in San Francisco, California .
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Original: On Wednesday morning, at approximately 10:00am CST, a Tyler, Texas woman died of a self-inflicted gunshot wound  at East Texas Medical Center .
Revised: A woman died of a self-inflicted gunshot wound at East Texas Medical Center .
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Original: A woman died of a self-inflicted gunshot wound Wednesday, around 10:00 a.m. local time at East Texas Medical Center in Tyler, Texas.
Revised: A woman died of a self-inflicted gunshot wound Wednesday, around 10:00 local time at East Texas Medical Center in Tyler, Texas.
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Original:  The woman, Alice Alvarez Aguilar, 46, was found by police on Tuesday morning lying on the floor of her apartment in Tyler from an apparent self-inflicted gunshot wound .
Revised:  The woman, Alice Alvarez Aguilar, 46, was found by police Tuesday morning on the floor of her apartment in Tyler from an apparent self-inflicted gunshot wound .
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Original:  The woman, Alice Alvarez Aguilar, 46, was found by police on Tuesday morning lying on the floor of her apartment in Tyler from an apparent self-inflicted gunshot wound .
Revised:  The woman, Alice Alvarez Aguilar, 46, was found by police on Tuesday morning lying on the floor of her apartment .
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Original:  The police had been called to Ms. Alvarez' apartment at approximately 12: 30pm pertaining to a report of gunshots.
Revised:  The police were called to Ms. Alvarez' apartment at approximately 12: 30pm pertaining to a report of gunshots.
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Original:  The police had been called to Ms. Alvarez' apartment at approximately 12: 30pm pertaining to a report of gunshots.
Revised:  The police had been called to Ms. Alvarez' s apartment around 12: 30pm pertaining to a report of gunshots.
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Original:  The police had been called to Ms. Alvarez' apartment at approximately 12: 30pm pertaining to a report of gunshots.
Revised:  The police had been called to Ms. Alvarez' apartment at approximately 12: 30 pertaining to a report of gunshots.
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Original:  When they arrived, they found Ms. Alvarez'  landlord, Socorro Nunez, 70, dead  in an adjacent apartment from an apparent gunshot wound .
Revised:  When they arrived, they found Ms. Alvarez' s landlord, Socorro Nunez, 70, dead in an adjacent apartment from an apparent gunshot wound .
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Original:  When they arrived, they found Ms. Alvarez'  landlord, Socorro Nunez, 70, dead  in an adjacent apartment from an apparent gunshot wound .
Revised:  When they arrived, they found Ms. Alvarez' landlord, Socorro Nunez, 70, dead in an adjacent apartment .
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Original:  Witnesses report hearing Ms. Aguilar and Ms. Nunez arguing over a guest when the gunshots were heard.
Revised:  Witnesses say they heard Ms. Aguilar and Ms. Nunez arguing over a guest when the gunshots were heard.
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Original:  Reports indicate the victim 's two sisters arrived at the apartment shortly after police.
Revised:  Reports indicate the victim 's two sisters arrived after police.
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Original:  Some witnesses acquainted with Ms. Aguilar reported she 'd recently experienced financial troubles, which may 've sparked the incident.
Revised:  Acquaintances of Ms. Aguilar reported she 'd recently experienced financial troubles, which may 've sparked the incident.
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Original:  Some witnesses acquainted with Ms. Aguilar reported she 'd recently experienced financial troubles, which may 've sparked the incident.
Revised:  Some witnesses acquainted with Ms. Aguilar reported she was experiencing financial troubles, which may 've sparked the incident.
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Original:  Some witnesses acquainted with Ms. Aguilar reported she 'd recently experienced financial troubles, which may 've sparked the incident.
Revised:  Some witnesses acquainted with Ms. Aguilar reported she 'd recently experienced financial troubles, which may have caused the incident.
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Original: In an interview on Wednesday with an acquaintance of Ms. Aguilar (who asked to remain anonymous ), the acquaintance stated, "I saw her [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
Revised: An acquaintance of Ms. Aguilar (who asked to remain anonymous ), the acquaintance stated, "I saw her [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
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Original: In an interview on Wednesday with an acquaintance of Ms. Aguilar (who asked to remain anonymous ), the acquaintance stated, "I saw her [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
Revised: In an interview on Wednesday with an acquaintance of Ms. Aguilar , wishing to remain anonymous ), the acquaintance stated, "I saw her [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
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Original: In an interview on Wednesday with an acquaintance of Ms. Aguilar (who asked to remain anonymous ), the acquaintance stated, "I saw her [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
Revised: In an interview on Wednesday with an acquaintance of Ms. Aguilar (who asked to remain anonymous , stated, "I saw her [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
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Original: In an interview on Wednesday with an acquaintance of Ms. Aguilar (who asked to remain anonymous ), the acquaintance stated, "I saw her [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
Revised: In an interview on Wednesday with an acquaintance of Ms. Aguilar (who asked to remain anonymous ), the acquaintance stated, "I saw [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
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Original:  She worked at [a nearby ] convenience store.
Revised:  She worked at [a ] convenience store.
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Original:  We talked a ' lot.
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Original:  An acquaintance of Ms . Aguilar, wishing to remain anonymous, stated, "I saw [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
Revised:  An acquaintance of Ms Aguilar, requesting anonymity, said it was unbelievable. "I saw [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day.
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Original:  She worked at a%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% convenience store.
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Original:  She worked at a%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% convenience store.
Revised:  She worked at %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% convenience store.
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Original:   She was a nice lady, just a regular person .
Revised:  .. She was a nice lady, just a regular person .
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Original:  An acquaintance of Ms  Aguilar, requesting anonymity, said it was unbelievable.
Revised:  An acquaintance of Ms . Aguilar, requesting anonymity, said it was unbelievable.
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Original:  "I saw [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day . ...
Revised:  "I saw [Ms. Aguilar] almost every day ...
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Original:  The prisoners, many of whom have been held since the overthrow of the Taliban in 2001, are angered at the United States' refusal to charge them with any crimes, and allegedly denying the prisoners legal access.
Revised:  The prisoners, many of whom have been held since the overthrow of the Taliban in 2001, are angered at the United States' refusal to charge them with any crimes, and denying the prisoners legal access.
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Original:  New Orleans evacuation Wednesday, August 31. (FEMA)
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Original:  The Superdome had been opened as a refuge of last resort for people who had not participated in the planned evacuation of the city before the storm.
Revised:  The Superdome had been opened as a refuge of last resort for people who could not take part in the planned evacuation of the city before the storm.
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