wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Foxconn is responsible for making iPads and iPhones for . A research group IHS iSuppli said that the explosion can cause loss of production of 500,000 Apple iPads during this quarter of the year.
Revised:  Foxconn is responsible for making iPads and for Apple. Research group IHS iSuppli said that the explosion can cause loss of production of 500,000 Apple iPads during this quarter of the year.
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Original:  Foxconn is responsible for making iPads and iPhones for . A research group IHS iSuppli said that the explosion can cause loss of production of 500,000 Apple iPads during this quarter of the year.
Revised:  Foxconn is responsible for making iPads and iPhones for . A research group IHS iSuppli said the explosion may cause loss of production of 500,000 Apple iPads during this quarter of the year.
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Original:  Foxconn is responsible for making iPads and iPhones for . A research group IHS iSuppli said that the explosion can cause loss of production of 500,000 Apple iPads during this quarter of the year.
Revised:  Foxconn is responsible for making iPads and iPhones for . A research group IHS iSuppli said that the explosion can cause loss of production of 500,000 iPads during this quarter of the year.
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Original:  They said that there is a larger facility in , but it would hardly cope with re-compensating the possible loss.
Revised:  They said there is a larger facility in , but it would hardly cope with re-compensating the possible loss.
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Original:  They said that there is a larger facility in , but it would hardly cope with re-compensating the possible loss.
Revised:  They said that there is a larger facility in , but it cannot cope with re-compensating the possible loss.
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Original:  Investigations now suggest the explosion was caused by poor ventilation, which lead to high concentrations of combustible dust.
Revised:  Initial investigations now suggest the explosion was caused by poor ventilation, which lead to high concentrations of combustible dust.
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Original:  On Friday evening, an explosion in , China caused partial shutdown of a facility operated by , one of the world's biggest electronics manufacturers and a major supplier to companies like , ,  and .
Revised:  On Friday evening, an explosion in , China caused partial shutdown of a facility operated by , one of the world's biggest electronics manufacturers and a major supplier to companies like , , , , and .
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Original:  Workers always breathe in aluminum dust even thought they put on masks.
Revised:  Workers always breathe in aluminum dust even though they put on masks.
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Original: An officer with London's has been charged with causing the death of a man caught up in protests during the in 2009.
Revised: An officer with London's has been charged with causing the death of a man caught up in the in 2009.
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Original:  PC Simon Harwood is accused of the manslaughter of , who died after Harwood hit him with a baton before pushing him to the ground  {{ 
Revised:  PC Simon Harwood is accused of the manslaughter of , who died after Harwood hit him with a baton before pushing him to the ground . {{ 
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Original:  That decision was placed under review after an inquest jury ruled last month that Tomlinson had been unlawfully killed    [ 
Revised:  That decision was placed under review after an inquest jury ruled last month that Tomlinson had been unlawfully killed . [ 
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Original:  He will appear before [City of Westminster Magistrates' Court] on 20 June 2011.  
Revised:  He will appear before [City of Westminster Magistrates' Court] on 20 June 2011. " 
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Original: Last year,  Director of Public Prosecutions for , announced that owing to conflicting medical evidence no charges would be brought  .
Revised: Last year, , Director of Public Prosecutions for , announced that owing to conflicting medical evidence no charges would be brought .
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Original: Last year,  Director of Public Prosecutions for , announced that owing to conflicting medical evidence no charges would be brought  .
Revised: Last year, Director of Public Prosecutions for , announced that no charges would be brought .
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Original:  He named two areas in which the inquest has had an impact: One being extra medical evidence , and the other being questioning in court to assess conflicting medical evidence from different sources.
Revised:  He named two areas in which the inquest has had an impact: One is extra medical evidence , and the other being questioning in court to assess conflicting medical evidence from different sources.
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Original:  He named two areas in which the inquest has had an impact: One being extra medical evidence , and the other being questioning in court to assess conflicting medical evidence from different sources.
Revised:  He named two areas in which the inquest has had an impact: One being extra medical evidence and the other being questioning in court to assess conflicting medical evidence from different sources.
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Original:  He named two areas in which the inquest has had an impact: One being extra medical evidence , and the other being questioning in court to assess conflicting medical evidence from different sources.
Revised:  He named two areas in which the inquest has had an impact: One being extra medical evidence , and the other is questioning in court to assess conflicting medical evidence from different sources.
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Original:  He adds  "the position in relation to the medical evidence about the cause of death has clearly changed," although he cautioned that the prosecution will remain difficult owing to conflicting medical evidence.
Revised:  He adds that "the position in relation to the medical evidence about the cause of death has clearly changed," although he cautioned that the prosecution will remain difficult owing to conflicting medical evidence.
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Original:  Starmer continued  "it is clearly in the public interest that criminal proceedings be brought.
Revised:  Starmer continued , saying that "it is clearly in the public interest that criminal proceedings be brought.
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Original:  Accordingly, a summons charging PC Harwood with the manslaughter of Mr Tomlinson has been obtained  ...
Revised:  Accordingly, a summons charging PC Harwood with the manslaughter of Mr Tomlinson has been obtained . ...
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Original:  The former director of the Central Intelligence Agency, Admiral Stansfield Turner, in a frank interview with the United Kingdom's ITV has condemned the current US administration.
Revised: Stansfield Turner The former director of the Central Intelligence Agency, Admiral Stansfield Turner, in a frank interview with the United Kingdom's ITV has condemned the current US administration.
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Original: In the ongoing attempt to force Muammar Gaddafi from power, NATO aircrafts struck at least 15 targets in central Tripoli early Tuesday morning, according to New York Times .
Revised: In the ongoing attempt to force Muammar Gaddafi from power, NATO aircraft struck at least 15 targets in central Tripoli early Tuesday morning, according to New York Times .
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Original: In the ongoing attempt to force Muammar Gaddafi from power, NATO aircrafts struck at least 15 targets in central Tripoli early Tuesday morning, according to New York Times .
Revised: In the ongoing attempt to force Muammar Gaddafi from power, NATO aircrafts struck at least 15 targets in central Tripoli early Tuesday morning, according to .
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Original:  According to AP , three people are dead and 150 more are wounded in what was the largest NATO bombing of Libya yet.
Revised:  According to the (AP) , three people are dead and 150 more are wounded in what was the largest NATO bombing of Libya yet.
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Original:  According to Reuters , United Nations approved of the NATO bombing campaign to protect Libyan citizens in the civil war.
Revised:  According to , United Nations approved of the NATO bombing campaign to protect Libyan citizens in the civil war.
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Original:  The bombings are part of the U.S. initiative to remove Gaddafi from power, which has since been taken over by NATO , according to AP . The campaign to halt Gaddafi's 41-year rule of Libya began in response to violent action taken against a public uprising in March.
Revised:  The bombings are part of the U.S. initiative to remove Gaddafi from power, which has since been taken over by NATO . The campaign to halt Gaddafi's 41-year rule of Libya began in response to violent action taken against a public uprising in March.
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Original:  According to , United Nations approved of the NATO bombing campaign to protect Libyan citizens in the civil war.
Revised:  The United Nations approved of the NATO bombing campaign to protect Libyan citizens in the civil war.
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Original:  According to , United Nations approved of the NATO bombing campaign to protect Libyan citizens in the civil war.
Revised:  According to , United Nations approved the NATO bombing campaign to protect Libyan citizens in the civil war.
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Original:  While the air strikes on the current Libyan regime are being increased, the rebels accepted the U.S. invitation on Tuesday to open an office in Washington , according to the New York Times .
Revised:  While the air strikes on the current Libyan regime are being increased, the rebels accepted the U.S. invitation on Tuesday to open an office in Washington .
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Original:  Gaddafi scoffs at NATO's attacks, claiming he is untouchable as he "lives in the hearts of millions , " according to the New York Times
Revised:  Gaddafi scoffs at NATO's attacks, claiming he is untouchable as he "lives in the hearts of millions " according to the New York Times
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Original:  Gaddafi scoffs at NATO's attacks, claiming he is untouchable as he "lives in the hearts of millions , " according to the New York Times
Revised:  Gaddafi scoffs at NATO's attacks, claiming he is untouchable as he "lives in the hearts of millions , " 
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Original: The bombers will fly from the major US base on the Pacific island of w: Guam.
Revised: The bombers will fly from the major US base on the Pacific island of Guam.
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Original: The Northern Territory Environment Centre says it is disgusted by the announcement.
Revised: The Northern Territory Environment Center says it is disgusted by the announcement.
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Original: In a joint agreement by  Australia and the United States  , the U.S. Air Force will begin regular strategic bomber aircraft training in the Northern Territory early next year.
Revised: In a joint agreement by Australia and the , the U.S. Air Force will begin regular strategic bomber aircraft training in the Northern Territory early next year.
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Original:  Under the new arrangements aircraft would fly direct from the United States for bombing operations at the Delamere Air Weapons Range situated about 130km south-west of Katherine in the Northern Territory.
Revised:  in the Northern Territory.
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Original:  Delamere is a 211,000ha bombing range used regularly by the Royal Australian Air Force (RAAF) for dropping live weapons.
Revised:  Delamere is a 211,000ha bombing range used regularly by the for dropping live weapons.
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Original:  The Darwin RAAF base would also be available for the bombers to land and refuel if necessary.
Revised:  The would also be available for the bombers to land and refuel if necessary.
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Original:  The planes will fly to the Northern Territory from the U.S. Pacific Island base of Guam .
Revised:  The planes will fly to the Northern Territory from the U.S. Pacific Island base of .
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Original:  Support Defence Minister Robert Hill says Australia is helping in the rebalancing of America's military forces in Asia.
Revised:  Support says Australia is helping in the rebalancing of America's military forces in Asia.
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Original:  The bombers will fly from the major US base on the Pacific island of Guam . "It may be aircraft that come down to Australia from a considerable distance and use our bombing ranges and then return without landing," he said.
Revised:  The bombers will fly from the major US base on the Pacific island of . "It may be aircraft that come down to Australia from a considerable distance and use our bombing ranges and then return without landing," he said.
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Original:  Labor's opposition defence spokesman, Robert McClelland , also supports the program.
Revised:  Labor's opposition defence spokesman, , also supports the program.
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Original:  Concerns But the Australian Greens are outraged by the project, saying there has been no consultation in the Territory.
Revised:  Concerns But the are outraged by the project, saying there has been no consultation in the Territory.
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Original:  "The Australian Government more and more is allowing the Americans to view this country as the 51st state," Greens leader Senator Bob Brown said.
Revised:  "The Australian Government more and more is allowing the Americans to view this country as the 51st state," said.
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Original:  The bomb, dropped by an F/A-18 Hornet , exploded near a control tower and damaged facilities at Delamere Air Weapons Range - attached to the RAAF Base Tindal near Katherine.
Revised:  The bomb, dropped by an , exploded near a control tower and damaged facilities at Delamere Air Weapons Range - attached to the RAAF Base Tindal near Katherine.
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Original:  At the time, Prime Minister John Howard said: "Things like this will always happen;
Revised:  At the time, said: "Things like this will always happen;
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Original:  Ms Shepherd is also worried about the possible use of depleted uranium . "I know that they use the depleted uranium on the warheads for added penetration ... and the weapons can penetrate much more easily with the depleted uranium and I'd be quite concerned if they use those kind of weapons," she said.
Revised:  Ms Shepherd is also worried about the possible use of . "I know that they use the depleted uranium on the warheads for added penetration ... and the weapons can penetrate much more easily with the depleted uranium and I'd be quite concerned if they use those kind of weapons," she said.
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Original:  "Only a matter of 100 kilometres or so from one of the proposed nuclear waste dump sites near Katherine, and it would be extraordinarily alarming and ironic if an American B-52 bomber dropped a live bomb on top of the Commonwealth's nuclear waste dump," he said.
Revised:  "Only a matter of 100 kilometres or so from one of the proposed dump sites near Katherine, and it would be extraordinarily alarming and ironic if an American B-52 bomber dropped a live bomb on top of the Commonwealth's nuclear waste dump," he said.
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Original: In a joint agreement by w|Australia|Australia and the%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% w|United States|United States , the U.S. Air Force will begin regular strategic bomber aircraft training in the  [[ in the Northern Territory.
Revised: In a joint agreement by and the%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% w|United States|United States , the U.S. Air Force will begin regular strategic bomber aircraft training in the [[ in the Northern Territory.
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Original: In a joint agreement by w|Australia|Australia and the%DIFDELCMD < {{%%% w|United States|United States , the U.S. Air Force will begin regular strategic bomber aircraft training in the  [[ in the Northern Territory.
Revised: In a joint agreement by w|Australia|Australia %DIFDELCMD < {{%%% w|United States|United States , the U.S. Air Force will begin regular strategic bomber aircraft training in the [[ in the Northern Territory.
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Original: After landing, recovery teams helped extract the crew from their capsule and adjust to surface gravity again.
Revised: After landing, recovery teams helped the crew exit their capsule and adjust to surface gravity again.
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Original:  While Kondratyev remained in Russia, while Coleman and Nespoli returned to Houston, Texas.
Revised:  While Kondratyev returned to the , Coleman and Nespoli returned to Houston, Texas.
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Original: The final episode of  The Oprah Winfrey Show was recorded today, with audience members saying the host gave an emotional, yet simple farewell.
Revised: The final episode of the popular American talk show The Oprah Winfrey Show was recorded today, with audience members saying the host gave an emotional, yet simple farewell.
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Original:  In contrast with the usual proceedings of the 25-year running afternoon show, there were no  guests or surprise gifts.
Revised:  In contrast with the usual proceedings of the 25-year running afternoon show, there were no special guests or surprise gifts.
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Original:  She leaves her show to focus on her new cable channel OWN
Revised:  Winfrey leaves her show to focus on her new cable channel OWN
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Original: The final episode of the popular American talk show The Oprah Winfrey Show was recorded today, with audience members saying the host gave an emotional, yet simple farewell.
Revised: The final episode of the popular American talk show was recorded today, with audience members saying the host gave an emotional, yet simple farewell.
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Original:  Winfrey leaves her show to focus on her new cable channel OWN
Revised:  Winfrey leaves her show to focus on her new cable channel 
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Original: The final episode of the popular American talk show was recorded today, with audience members saying the host gave an emotional, yet simple farewell.
Revised: The final episode of popular US talk show was recorded today, with audience members saying the host gave an emotional, yet simple farewell.
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Original:  In contrast with the usual proceedings of the 25-year running afternoon show  , there were no special guests or surprise gifts.
Revised:  In contrast with the 25-year running afternoon show , there were no special guests or surprise gifts.
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Original:  In contrast with the usual proceedings of the 25-year running afternoon show  , there were no special guests or surprise gifts.
Revised:  In contrast with the usual proceedings of the 25-year running afternoon show 's usual proceedings , there were no special guests or surprise gifts.
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Original:  Instead, Winfrey sat solo on her stage in Chicago and used the time to thank her fans and to talk about her life and the importance of striving for your goals.
Revised:  Instead, Winfrey sat solo on her stage in and used the time to thank her fans and to talk about her life and the importance of striving for your goals.
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Original:  Tammy Brownlee, 31, who was in the audience, said “ she talked about her upbringing, and that it’s a miracle that she became the person she became ”. “ It was just her the whole time, a recap of what she believed in, what we’ve given her as viewers and what she hopes she has given us, ” said Nancy Evankoe, 60, who was also present.
Revised:  Tammy Brownlee, 31, who was in the audience, said " she talked about her upbringing, and that it’s a miracle that she became the person she became ”. “ It was just her the whole time, a recap of what she believed in, what we’ve given her as viewers and what she hopes she has given us, ” said Nancy Evankoe, 60, who was also present.
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Original:  Tammy Brownlee, 31, who was in the audience, said “ she talked about her upbringing, and that it’s a miracle that she became the person she became ”. “ It was just her the whole time, a recap of what she believed in, what we’ve given her as viewers and what she hopes she has given us, ” said Nancy Evankoe, 60, who was also present.
Revised:  Tammy Brownlee, 31, who was in the audience, said “ she talked about her upbringing, and that it’s a miracle that she became the person she became “ It was just her the whole time, a recap of what she believed in, what we’ve given her as viewers and what she hopes she has given us, ” said Nancy Evankoe, 60, who was also present.
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Original:  Tammy Brownlee, 31, who was in the audience, said “ she talked about her upbringing, and that it’s a miracle that she became the person she became ”. “ It was just her the whole time, a recap of what she believed in, what we’ve given her as viewers and what she hopes she has given us, ” said Nancy Evankoe, 60, who was also present.
Revised:  Tammy Brownlee, 31, who was in the audience, said “ she talked about her upbringing, and that it’s a miracle that she became the person she became ”. ". " It was just her the whole time, a recap of what she believed in, what we’ve given her as viewers and what she hopes she has given us, ” said Nancy Evankoe, 60, who was also present.
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Original:  Tammy Brownlee, 31, who was in the audience, said “ she talked about her upbringing, and that it’s a miracle that she became the person she became ”. “ It was just her the whole time, a recap of what she believed in, what we’ve given her as viewers and what she hopes she has given us, ” said Nancy Evankoe, 60, who was also present.
Revised:  Tammy Brownlee, 31, who was in the audience, said “ she talked about her upbringing, and that it’s a miracle that she became the person she became ”. “ It was just her the whole time, a recap of what she believed in, what we’ve given her as viewers and what she hopes she has given us, " said Nancy Evankoe, 60, who was also present.
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Original:  Although Winfrey was tearful in her farewell, she made it clear that to her large number of devoted fans around the world that it is not the end.
Revised:  Although Winfrey was tearful in her farewell, she made it clear that to her large number of fans around the world that it is not the end.
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Original:  “ This is not going to be goodbye.
Revised:  " This is not going to be goodbye.
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Original:  This is the closing of one chapter and the opening of a new one. ”
Revised:  This is the closing of one chapter and the opening of a new one. "
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Original:  Instead, Winfrey sat solo on her stage in and used the time to thank her fans and to talk about her life and the importance of striving for your goals.
Revised:  Instead, Winfrey sat solo on her stage in and used the time to thank her fans and to talk about her life and the importance of striving for one's goals.
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Original:  He recieved twenty years imprisonment for wounding and armed robbery    
Revised:  He recieved twenty years imprisonment for wounding and armed robbery . 
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Revised:  Moulder's report drew on evidence from Inspector Brian Reynolds, who began the investigation into the robbery before responsibility was passed to the specialist Robbery Squad. Reynolds had criticisms of the Robbery Squad, but said senior officers warned him not to obstruct in any way Davis's conviction. Robbery Squad was being led by , whose claim to fame is that he tracked down the . ] ] 
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Revised:  ]," he remarked outside court. Asked about being called stupid, Davis remarked "He can call me what he likes after ] 
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Revised:  ] ] The appeal was heard by a panel of three judges. Lord Justice Hughes said they were in a "state of ignorance whether or not the defendant committed this robbery and we are unable positively to exonerate him". "We do not know whether Davis was guilty or not, but his conviction cannot be said to be safe," Hughes concluded. 
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