wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The aim of these projects was to show that people could live underwater for prolonged periods of time, while being subjected to the harsh environments of the deep see .
Revised:  The aim of these projects was to show that people could live underwater for prolonged periods of time, while being subjected to the harsh environments of the deep sea .
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Original:  The   aim of these  projects was to show that people could live underwater for prolonged periods of time, while being subjected to the harsh environments of the deep sea.
Revised:  The The aim of these projects was to show that people could live underwater for prolonged periods of time, while being subjected to the harsh environments of the deep sea.
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Original:  Precontinent I was constructed offshore from Marsaille , France, in 1962.
Revised:  Precontinent I was constructed offshore from Marsaille , France, in 1962.
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Original:  Two divers spent in a small chamber 12 meters deep on the seabed.
Revised:  Two scuba divers spent two weeks in a small chamber 12 meters deep on the seabed.
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Original:  In 1996, he became the first native African to win a National Heritage Fellowship Award from Federal government of the United States' National Endowment for the Arts  .
Revised:  In 1996, he became the first native African to win a National Heritage Fellowship from the National Endowment for the Arts .
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Original: After a long battle with liver cancer, Addy died on September 13, 2012.
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Original:  Awards He founded the Homowo African Arts and Cultures organization,  which sponsors the annual Homowo Festival of African Arts in Oregon.
Revised:  Awards He founded the Homowo African Arts and Cultures organization, a non-profit which sponsors the annual Homowo Festival of African Arts in Oregon.
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Original:     He was awarded a Master's Fellowship from the Oregon Arts Commission and Regional Arts & Culture Council, and the Oregon Governors Award for the Arts.
Revised:  Awards He was awarded a Master's Fellowship from the Oregon Arts Commission and Regional Arts & Culture Council, and the Oregon Governors Award for the Arts.
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Original: Awards  He was awarded a Master's Fellowship from the Oregon Arts Commission and Regional Arts & Culture Council, and the Oregon Governors Award for the Arts.
Revised: Awards and honors He was awarded a Master's Fellowship from the Oregon Arts Commission and Regional Arts & Culture Council, and the Oregon Governors Award for the Arts.
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Original: The term Eltonian Niche refers to a definition of the ecological niche concept that emphasizes the functional attributes of animals and their corresponding trophic position.
Revised: The Eltonian niche is an ecological niche that emphasizes the functional attributes of animals and their corresponding trophic position.
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Original:  His son, Aaron, is also a reputable figure in the music industry, working at Warner Music Group.
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Original: Filmography McDull, the Alumni (2006) Throw Down (2006) Tigers, The Legend of Canton (Guang Dong wu hu zhi tie quan wu di Sun Zhong Shan) (1993) Let Us Flirt, Partner (Pai dang chuang qing guan) (1985)  Return of Pom Pom , The (1984) The Militarism Revival (Nu ba tai yang qi) (1983) Return of the Condor Heroes (Sun diu hap lui) (1983) Love Encore (TVB 1982) Sealed with a Kiss (Liang xiao wu zhi) (1981) Don't Play with Fire (Di yi lei xing wei xian) (1980) Dangerous Encounter -
Revised: Filmography McDull, the Alumni (2006) Throw Down (2006) Tigers, The Legend of Canton (Guang Dong wu hu zhi tie quan wu di Sun Zhong Shan) (1993) Let Us Flirt, Partner (Pai dang chuang qing guan) (1985) The Return of Pom Pom , The (1984) The Militarism Revival (Nu ba tai yang qi) (1983) Return of the Condor Heroes (Sun diu hap lui) (1983) Love Encore (TVB 1982) Sealed with a Kiss (Liang xiao wu zhi) (1981) Don't Play with Fire (Di yi lei xing wei xian) (1980) Dangerous Encounter -
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Original: Filmography McDull, the Alumni (2006) Throw Down (2006) Tigers, The Legend of Canton (Guang Dong wu hu zhi tie quan wu di Sun Zhong Shan) (1993) Let Us Flirt, Partner (Pai dang chuang qing guan) (1985)  Return of Pom Pom , The (1984) The Militarism Revival (Nu ba tai yang qi) (1983) Return of the Condor Heroes (Sun diu hap lui) (1983) Love Encore (TVB 1982) Sealed with a Kiss (Liang xiao wu zhi) (1981) Don't Play with Fire (Di yi lei xing wei xian) (1980) Dangerous Encounter -
Revised: Filmography McDull, the Alumni (2006) Throw Down (2006) Tigers, The Legend of Canton (Guang Dong wu hu zhi tie quan wu di Sun Zhong Shan) (1993) Let Us Flirt, Partner (Pai dang chuang qing guan) (1985) Return of Pom Pom (1984) The Militarism Revival (Nu ba tai yang qi) (1983) Return of the Condor Heroes (Sun diu hap lui) (1983) Love Encore (TVB 1982) Sealed with a Kiss (Liang xiao wu zhi) (1981) Don't Play with Fire (Di yi lei xing wei xian) (1980) Dangerous Encounter -
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Original: Filmography McDull, the Alumni (2006) Throw Down (2006) Tigers, The Legend of Canton (Guang Dong wu hu zhi tie quan wu di Sun Zhong Shan) (1993) Let Us Flirt, Partner (Pai dang chuang qing guan) (1985)  Return of Pom Pom , The (1984) The Militarism Revival (Nu ba tai yang qi) (1983) Return of the Condor Heroes (Sun diu hap lui) (1983) Love Encore (TVB 1982) Sealed with a Kiss (Liang xiao wu zhi) (1981) Don't Play with Fire (Di yi lei xing wei xian) (1980) Dangerous Encounter -
Revised: Filmography McDull, the Alumni (2006) Throw Down (2006) Tigers, The Legend of Canton (Guang Dong wu hu zhi tie quan wu di Sun Zhong Shan) (1993) Let Us Flirt, Partner (Pai dang chuang qing guan) (1985) Return of Pom Pom , The (1984) The Militarism Revival (Nu ba tai yang qi) (1983) Return of the Condor Heroes (Sun diu hap lui) (1983) Love Encore (TVB 1982) Sealed with a Kiss (Liang xiao wu zhi) (1981) Dangerous Encounters of the First Kind (Di yi lei xing wei xian) (1980) Dangerous Encounter -
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs " The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence " " I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend " "Windflowers" "Bridge over Trouble Water" " Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song " "Dust in the Wind" "Diary" "Perhaps Love" " The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World " "Visions" " Love Me Tender Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender " " Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender Both Sides Now " "Rhinestone Cowboy" " Streets of London House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London " " House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London House of Rising Sun " "Yellow Bird" " Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember " "Country Roads" " When a Child Is Born 
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Original:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs  The Sound of Silence  I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender  Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London  House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born 
Revised:  1st Kind (1980) Covered Songs The Sound of Silence I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song Longer Vincent If You've Got a Friend Windflowers Bridge Over Trouble Water Danny's Song Dust In the WindDiary Perhaps Love The End of the World Visions Love Me Tender Both Sides Now Rhinestone Cowboy Streets of London House of Rising Sun Yellow Bird Try to Remember Country Roads When a Child Is Born "
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Original:  Covered Songs "The Sound of Silence" "I'll Have To Say I Love You In a Song" "Longer" "Vincent" "If" "You've Got a Friend" "Windflowers" "Bridge over Trouble Water" "Danny's Song" "Dust in the Wind" "Diary" "Perhaps Love" "The End of the World" "Visions" "Love Me Tender" "Both Sides Now" "Rhinestone Cowboy" "Streets of London" "House of Rising Sun" "Yellow Bird" "Try to Remember" "Country Roads" "When a Child Is Born"
Revised:  Covered Songs "The Sound of Silence" "I'll Have To Say I Love You in a Song" "Longer" "Vincent" "If" "You've Got a Friend" "Windflowers" "Bridge over Trouble Water" "Danny's Song" "Dust in the Wind" "Diary" "Perhaps Love" "The End of the World" "Visions" "Love Me Tender" "Both Sides Now" "Rhinestone Cowboy" "Streets of London" "House of Rising Sun" "Yellow Bird" "Try to Remember" "Country Roads" "When a Child Is Born"
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Original: Albert Au Shui Keung ( Chinese:區瑞強 ) is a Hong Kong English pop and Cantopop singer-songwriter and DJ of RTHK.
Revised: Albert Au Shui Keung ( ) is a Hong Kong English pop and Cantopop singer-songwriter and DJ of RTHK.
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Original:  External links Fonds Sylvain E. Gallant The Canadian parliamentary companion, 1897 JA Gemmill Past and Present of Prince Edward Island ..., DA MacKinnon & AB Warburton (1906)
Revised:  External links The Canadian parliamentary companion, 1897 JA Gemmill Past and Present of Prince Edward Island ..., DA MacKinnon & AB Warburton (1906)
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Original:   Category: 1839 births Category:1918 deaths Category:People from Prince County, Prince Edward Island Category:Prince Edward Island Liberal Party MLAs Category:Acadian peop
Revised:  . Category: 1839 births Category:1918 deaths Category:People from Prince County, Prince Edward Island Category:Prince Edward Island Liberal Party MLAs Category:Acadian peop
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Original: Etienne (Stephen) Gallant, Prince Edward Island Legislative Documents Online . External links The Canadian parliamentary companion, 1897 JA Gemmill Past and Present of Prince Edward Island ..., DA MacKinnon AB Warburton (1906)
Revised: Etienne (Stephen) Gallant, Prince Edward Island Legislative Documents Online . AB Warburton (1906)
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Original:  As a general rule, all impacted teeth must be removed except, in certain cases, canine teeth: canines may just remain buried and give no further problems, thus not requiring surgical intervention.
Revised:  Some dentists believe that as a general rule, all impacted teeth must be removed except, in certain cases, canine teeth: canines may just remain buried and give no further problems, thus not requiring surgical intervention.
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Original: Some dentists believe that as a general rule, all impacted teeth must be URL The National Health Service's information page about wisdom tooth removal except, in certain cases, canine teeth: canines may just remain buried and give no further problems, thus not requiring surgical intervention.
Revised: Some dentists believe that impacted teeth should be removed except, in certain cases, canine teeth: canines may just remain buried and give no further problems, thus not requiring surgical intervention.
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Original:  However, removal of an asymptomatic, pathology-free, impacted tooth isn't a medical consensus: watchful monitoring may be a more prudent and cost-effective strategy and make the future placement of a dental implant through such impacted tooth a feasible approach.
Revised:  However, removal of asymptomatic, pathology-free, impacted tooth isn't a medical consensus: watchful monitoring may be a more prudent and cost-effective strategy and make the future placement of a dental implant through such impacted tooth a feasible approach.
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Original:  However, removal of an asymptomatic, pathology-free, impacted tooth isn't a medical consensus: watchful monitoring may be a more prudent and cost-effective strategy and make the future placement of a dental implant through such impacted tooth a feasible approach.
Revised:  However, removal of an asymptomatic, pathology-free, impacted teeth isn't a medical consensus: watchful monitoring may be a more prudent and cost-effective strategy and make the future placement of a dental implant through such impacted tooth a feasible approach.
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Original:  The type of extraction ( simple or surgical ) often depends on the location of the teeth.
Revised:  The type of extraction ( simple or surgical , often depending on the location of the teeth.
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Original:  However, removal of asymptomatic, pathology-free, impacted teeth isn't a medical URL The National Health Service's information page about wisdom tooth URL The Prophylactic Extraction of Third Molars: A Public Health Hazard, Jay W. Friedman, Am J Public Health, 2007 watchful monitoring may be a more prudent and cost-effective strategy and make the future placement of a dental implant through such impacted tooth a feasible approach.
Revised:  However, removal of asymptomatic, pathology-free, impacted teeth isn't a medical URL The National Health Service's information page about wisdom tooth removal watchful monitoring may be a more prudent and cost-effective strategy and make the future placement of a dental implant through such impacted tooth a feasible approach.
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Original: The Soviets used sex not only for direct recruitment, but as a contingency where an American officer might need to be compromised in the future .
Revised: The Soviets used sex not only for direct recruitment, but as a contingency where an American officer .
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Original: Clandestine HUMINT asset recruiting refers to the recruitment of human agents, commonly known as spies, who work for a foreign government,  within a host country's government , or other targets of intelligence interest for the gathering of human intelligence.
Revised: Clandestine HUMINT asset recruiting refers to the recruitment of human agents, commonly known as spies, who work for a foreign government, or within a host country's government , or other targets of intelligence interest for the gathering of human intelligence.
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Original: Clandestine HUMINT asset recruiting refers to the recruitment of human agents, commonly known as spies, who work for a foreign government,  within a host country's government , or other targets of intelligence interest for the gathering of human intelligence.
Revised: Clandestine HUMINT asset recruiting refers to the recruitment of human agents, commonly known as spies, who work for a foreign government, within a host country's government or other target of intelligence interest for the gathering of human intelligence.
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Original:  The methods of detecting and "doubling" spies who betray their oaths to work on behalf of a foreign intelligence agency are called counterintelligence.
Revised:  The work of detecting and "doubling" spies who betray their oaths to work on behalf of a foreign intelligence agency are called counterintelligence.
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Original:  The methods of detecting and "doubling" spies who betray their oaths to work on behalf of a foreign intelligence agency are called counterintelligence.
Revised:  The methods of detecting and "doubling" spies who betray their oaths to work on behalf of a foreign intelligence agency is an important part of counterintelligence.
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Original: Prioritizing potential recruitment This step differs from the next one, assessment of potential recruits, in that it is not focused on the recruit himself or herself, the probability of recruitment, etc., but, when there is more than one possible recruit, and a finite amount of case officer time, the discussion here gives criteria to select the most important targets.
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Original:  Thomas Hutton-Mills, Sr., was a grandson, and Charles Edward Woolhouse Bannerman a great-grandson. also related to matthew gwan
Revised:  Thomas Hutton-Mills, Sr., was a grandson, and Charles Edward Woolhouse Bannerman a great-grandson. 
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Original: Gilbert DesRoches (  July 1848 – June 2 , 1915) was a merchant, farmer and political figure in Prince Edward Island.
Revised: Gilbert DesRoches ( July 1848 – 2 , 1915) was a merchant, farmer and political figure in Prince Edward Island.
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Original:  He was born on the 23rd or 24 July 1848 in Miscouche, Prince Edward Island, the son of Jean DesRoches and Nanette Poirier, Acadians.
Revised:  He was born on 23 or 24 July 1848 in Miscouche, Prince Edward Island, the son of Jean DesRoches and Nanette Poirier, Acadians.
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Original: Gilbert DesRoches ( 23 or 24 July 1848 – 2 June 1915) was a merchant, farmer and political figure in Prince Edward Island.
Revised: Gilbert DesRoches ( 24 July 1848 – 2 June 1915) was a merchant, farmer and political figure in Prince Edward Island.
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